Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Jumper (Ro) ~ Redone
shorthaired blanks suck 21:38, 8/23/2017

Add some shading on the collar teeth and smooth the ear pink

fixed. theres shading on the teeth already? 22:29, 8/23/2017

I mean the ones in the light, with, you know, no shading. They look flat and I think some shading could be added to make them look more 3d but *shrug*

i didnt add shading there because it would contradict my source. its fine as is, but if more people agree, ill add them 22:35, 8/23/2017

I know this is from a different side, but since this was nominated to match Barley exactly, I think that the tail black placement needs to match the loner above this and just be the tip instead of all the way across. And perhaps a splotch of black on the very > side of the belly too.

fixed. 23:34, 8/23/2017

Jumper and Hoot look exactly the same as Barley. The Heart of a Warrior shows just as much on multiple panels. You need to match the pattern that David has set a lot better, different side or not. Which actually means you need to match this, as the warrior blank shows this side of the image.

fixed. think i got it? 03:13, 8/24/2017

Remove the underbite. For one, there's no proof that's Jumper. For two, they are identical cats. For three, he's not always shown with the teeth like that. There are some pictures that actually show said cat's teeth on the upper part of his mouth as well, so while it might be an underbite, since there are alternating images, we can't add it w/out concrete proof.

fixed. 18:53, 8/24/2017

Could you maybe dull down the blue shading a bit? I feel like it's too saturated, but that's just my opinion.. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 05:04, August 25, 2017 (UTC)

fixed. is this better? 05:09, 8/25/2017

I feel like the < black patch on the tail should be smaller, receded on < side, because on barley's images it doesn't go the length of the tail like this

Define the shading everywhere. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:17, August 27, 2017 (UTC)

i dont know why i would have to define it? i was told to lighten/dull it down, and idk if thatd trigger the same response if i defined it 03:45, 8/27/2017

Sorry was tired. Maybe just on the legs, collar, and around the ears. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:46, August 27, 2017 (UTC)

withdrawinf. 06:34, 8/30/2017

Can I take over? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 14:27, August 30, 2017 (UTC)

sure, go for it^^

Re-uploaded. I didn't know if I should make a new topic or just upload over this, but I just uploaded it over this. Also do we add his underbite or? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:36, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

Jumper (Lo) ~ Redone
Pink collars are cool. Redone to match Barley and Hoot. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:14, August 30, 2017 (UTC)

There should be a black part on the very > side of the belly like what's shown on Barley's loner :)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:50, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Added something to his leg. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:40, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the belly shading just a little bit? Pretty ^^ 01:31, September 2, 2017 (UTC)

Mole (Cat) (Star) - Tweaked
OA was Hawky, tweaked to remove the ragged fur. 23:55, August 31, 2017 (UTC)

Hoot (Ro) ~ Redone


Looks gorgeous! You forgot to smudge the two back legs that parts the black/white. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:56, September 2, 2017 (UTC)

Slash (Alt R) ~ Tweaked
for mangy fur. Skye, if you want this, I'll pass it over