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Sandstorm (Alt W) ~ For Approval
She looks like she has blue eyes in the picture. Kind of like this one. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:24, 12/24/2018 ]

Reuploaded Made the texture more visible. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:29, 12/24/2018 ]

Can you lighten the haunch shading a bit? And I’m not exactly sure what your light source is. 13:42, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded when you put shading on the lineart layer Hope this makes a difference? the tail shading was ruining the light source. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:51, 12/24/2018 ]

The shading looks lke it's leaking way from the lineart on the back a smidge Malina457 (talk) 14:59, December 24, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define the shading on the right front leg--Potato Flakin (talk) 15:55, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, define the shading on all the legs 17:32, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink a bit! :) 20:12, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Silverfur   skz  [ 03:17, 12/25/2018 ]

Define the light on the legs.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:35, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

'''Reups. Silverfur  skz  [ 04:15, 12/25/2018 ] '''

This color doesn't quite look like it matches the image color very well. Is that where you got this color from? ​​​​

I got it from the starclan one, but i'll change it. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:07, 12/25/2018 ]

Understandable, but I think in this case, it should match the field guide images that it's meant to depict. You didn't do anything wrong, I just think it was a miscommunication as to what image you should get coloring from. ​​​

Reups! Does it look better? -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:10, 12/25/2018 ]

She needs to be a lot more orange, just like the image from The Ultimate Guide/Cats of the Clans. If you need to, I can help you get an appropriate color. ​​

I colorpicked from her head/neck. Wait i'm gonna reup and if it doesn't look good then you could help. Silverfur  skz  [ 11:41, 12/25/2018 ]

Reups The color looks unnatural imo. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:42, 12/25/2018 ]

It has to match what we're given, unnatural or not. She's still not looking orange enough.... I'll see what I can do, but given the lighting and how these are painted, it might not be possible to get a good pixel to pick from.

Humor me and see what #D9994A looks like. I saw where you colorpicked from the head, and I'm thinking there's a lot of light there in general. ​​​​​​​

Looks a bit golden yellow in #D9994A. Let's see how it looks  Silverfur   skz  [ 11:52, 12/25/2018 ]

Reups Looks okay I guess. Silverfur  skz  [ 11:54, 12/25/2018 ]

I think it also might be your shading color...each pixel in her image is a totally different color, making picking extremely difficult. Leave it like this for now, and if someone else comes along with a better alternative that still looks ginger, then go ahead and change it....her art doesn't really show her as pale, but more of a neutral ginger coloring. ​​​​

Define the earpink a bit, and --> hind leg shading is receding away from the lineart.​ Also smooth the shading out on --> hind leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:21, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Oops I forgot something- Define the tail shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:24, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the < side of the haunch 03:38, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups  Silverfur   skz  [ 04:20, 12/26/2018

Define the light on the tail and lower the opacity of the shading a bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 05:58, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

reups   𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [ ]

Hmm... disregard this if you are the OA of the set, but I don't think the pelt colour matches the queen. Or vice versa, unsure of which one will be considered the first in set, but the colours should stay consistent to match. —​​

Realized yours is first in set, nvm. —​​

Reups Fixed some issues -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [09:03, 12/27/2018 ]

Shrink the earpink it a lil' bit. There's also waste outside --> this front leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 06:17, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [12:14, 12/28/2018 ]

Reups I uploaded the wrong file and apparently had 2 clones and couldnt find out which one i had done the reup on. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [12:40, 12/28/2018 ]

the shading seems too sharp on the flank, smooth it a bit. Also it seems the shading is leaking from the back lineart slightly.

14:10, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.--Potato Flakin (talk) 14:27, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the < front leg, and add some shading on the part of the back where it meets the tail

Smooth out the haunch shading. —​​

There's too much shading on the hind leg closest to us, around the end of the leg and near no shading on the paw. This is looking good still! SquidwardPlays 20:21, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups..  𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [05:50, 12/29/2018 ]

Smooth out the shading some more. 09:06, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Little Mew (Ki) - CBA
And the award for the cutest kitten name ever goes to... 22:55, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

There's some gray fur on top of his/her head. Is that meant to be there? The nose appears to not be filled in.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:38, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry Potato, but the nose is filled in a hot pink color and the tufts are edged with black. I don't see what you're talking about. 00:10, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I think Potato is asking why the head tuffs appear lighter than the rest of that area. 03:28, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I can't see shading, might be my screen. 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣  𝓼𝓴𝔃  [03:46, 12/27/2018 ]

Oh sorry, I misunderstood. The description says they have a lighter tuft of fur on their head. Also, may I have a second opinion about the shading? I can see it pretty well. 13:30, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

While I agree the shading is visible, it almost seems overblurred. Defining your lightsource should help, perhaps by defining the light on the hind paw, ---> front leg and haunch? 02:03, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups. I tried doing what you said, Vec, and also added more definition to the shading itself. 18:36, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? ​

To-Be Blanks ~ For Approval
Alrighty let's do this. I'm only gonna post one at a time for my sanity sorry ;u; 01:03, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Please do not apologize for posting one at a time, it is obviously going to be stressful if you do two, so do not overwork yourself. Not sure if this makes any sense, but the blanks look a tad crooked. I am not really sure how to explain it though... does anyone else know how to? 01:07, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Nice! Could you make these a bit bigger? They’re small, not much bigger than the kits, and lots of us want those bigger. Not too much, just maybe apprentice size? :) 01:10, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I think I know what could help the crookedness. The stomachs right now look really unnaturally flat. Their chest (rib cage more specifically) is supposed to stoop a little lower than the stomach. If you need me to, I can highlight an example. 01:14, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Another thing, the pose is a bit stiff and rigid. I know this was the original pose, but it is almost unnaturally rigid with how the joints are positioned. 01:17 Thu Dec 27

Reups Took longer that I thought, but how's that size wise? @Sun, I'm honestly not sure how to address your concern. And @everyone, any red lines you are willing to provide, please go ahead! ^^ 02:42, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make a small line for a mouth, kinda like the deputy blank? :) 02:47, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Round the ears a tad and the floof on the longhair looks flat. Curve the lineart to flow with the floof if ya get what I mean.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:18, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I'll do a skeleton thing when I get home. It's an easy fix, actually. 13:44 Thu Dec 27

http://i63.tinypic.com/2en6gqe.png Here we go. The red is muscles/mass, the blue is the skeleton. 17:15 Thu Dec 27

Reups Thanks Sun! 19:19, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

can you shorten the neck a little? it looks to long.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:33, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 23:27, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

the paws look slightly too big for the legs.

23:57, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

the necks still look to long, I. will try to get a refrence to how long I think, but I am on my brothers computer currently. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:13, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Idk if it’s just me, but the head looks a little small for the body. 19:20, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Nope Winter you're not alone. Round the shorthair's chest a bit more?Potato Flakin (talk) 19:58, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

What do you mean by round? 20:07, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry if this is overstepping ;; Um.. I made a redline (for better view) and my anatomy might be a bit off but I couldn't find the words to describe any of this skjdksdjds. —​​​​​​​

Vec you need to raise the booty to match the height of the shoulder Gotcha thanks for the red line! This really helps. 20:23, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups These are slowly getting better imo. 21:00, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Minor things. 02:20, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

redline for neck.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 06:16, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the eyes a tiny bit bigger? :) 06:34, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I absolutely love how these are turning out. I made a red line of the shorthair showing things that I think could be improved. The ear closest to us needs some sort of line separating the back of the ear from the inside of the ear, and I personally think the shoulder and jawline are too round (but this is optional.) The front leg comes up at an awkward angle when it meets the body, and I think this could be improved by doing something similar to what my redline shows. The chest on the short hair could be a little rounder too (the long hair's chest is fine! 14:48, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Onestar (Alt W) ~ For Evaluation
Should match his description from TUG CloudymoonTheCat

Hm, might just be me or the coloring, but the shading along the lineart seems to be leaking pretty much everywhere.

15:34, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

You did the stripes amazingly! But, Define shading all over except for the tail. And since you're still a kit iirc, until a kit is promoted to apprentice it should be For Evaluation, but correct me if I'm wrong. SquidwardPlays 15:50, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

On the topic of shading, is it tinted? Tinting it with a color might help me see it better. Potato Flakin (talk) 16:16, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

It would be 'For Evaluation', yes. Also, make the stripes thinner and add more of them, per the leader alt it needs to match

There needs to be more white in between the light brown. The leader alt also appears to not have any dark brown on it, so remove that. I forgot to say this is lovely Cloudymoon!Potato Flakin (talk) 19:29, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

In 'dark brown' do you mean the stripes or the base colour? Because he Have dark stripes if you zoom in CloudymoonTheCat

Lemme rephrase that- lighten them, they are way darker that the leader. I meant the stripes.--Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the pale parts to match the leader and make the tail become lighter as it approaches the tail tip. 14:39, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt Star) - For Approval
Everything is from the warrior. 16:57 Thu Dec 27

Shouldn't she be longhaired? It looks great, BTW! CloudymoonTheCat

the image it's based off is shortahired. 19:38, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I feel like the dark gray and pale gray parts are too distinct here, as compared to the warrior. On the warrior, they seem to very much blend into each other. 18:38, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt W) - CBA
I love to make charart ;w;. First tabby, I like how it looks myself, so i'm pretty proud. I tried to match the Deputy above on the page as best as I could. SquidwardPlays 02:20, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

This looks great! Would you like the file? 02:31, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, yes, please and thank you! SquidwardPlays 02:33, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I fumbled around once I received the Deputy file, I personally think it looks and matches better, but let's see what else there is to be said. SquidwardPlays 03:22, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Very good!! Could you make the earpink a bit lighter? it doesn't look quite so dark on the deputy.

03:28, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Easy problem easy fix~ Turns out that there was just too much shading on that spot, I lessened it on that spot. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:32, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Accidentally produced some waste, gotten rid of it. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:33, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

There's some waste outside --> that front leg, this is absoulutely lovely.Potato Flakin (talk) 05:04, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

The stripes seem more jagged/slightly ridged on the warrior^^

Reups Havent figured out the stripes yet? But I got the waste I think. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 21:37, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

What I did to make the stripes jagged, I use a 1 point (or smaller) eraser with a lowered opacity (anything under 60% should work) and gently went over the stripes. ^^ 21:53, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups i attempted to do what Vec said, does it look better? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:07, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

There is waste outside the chest. 22:35, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:40, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 17:06, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Windstar (Alt. Ro) ~ For Approval
All colors from alt leader. Comments? 03:11, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

The facial markings seem.. Bolder and like there's more there than in the leader, if that makes sense? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:23, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:25, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth the belly shading some?

Littlecloud(mc alt 2)~for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​​​​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to  the  alt  mentioned  above  by  Echo, this  would  have  to  be  renamed  '' File:Littlecloud. mc. alt2. png ''. Mind fixing  that  real  quick  Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^ 17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Boulder (Warrior Alt 2) ~ For Approval
here he is, I love this sides design. I'll fix the shading in my next upload so try to refrain from commenting on that please. 20:13, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

This is great! But would you mind shrinking the earpink? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 20:15, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Don't forget some of the paler parts on his face and such. The elder is the first in this set I believe if that's not being redone (can't remember). 20:16, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I've used ear pink like this before, if you could explain what you mean so I'm sure I know what you mean before saying I'd like to keep to like this. I'll do the pale on my next upload. I just needed to get this up. 20:17, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste at the top of the ear. (Im on mobile otherwise I'd redline;;) —​​​​​

Hereis a reference for the waste that Echo mentioned. (first link, you may need to zoom in)Potato Flakin (talk) 01:30, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Please smooth out the shading, maybe lighten it a tad. 01:51, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I know to smooth it out, I ask that nobody comment on the shading until the next upload please. 01:54, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think the stripes are slightly thicker on the elder overall, and have a more blurred effect. I know this is a different side, but the style has to match.

I know the style has to match, that's what I was going for. I'll thicken some of the chest but I think it's okay that a few are thinner. From what I saw on the elder, they looked smudged. I could be wrong though. 07:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The elder has some white on the chest and face. That needs to apply here as well. 14:37, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Littlecloud (Alt K) ~ For Approval
all stuffs from alt mca

when can I cba things? oh! somthing wrong? the shading looks to dark, but I think that is all the problems! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 06:28, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Owlbite, you can only CBA when your the project lead. The shading looks fine to me. 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣  𝓼𝓴𝔃  [07:36, 12/29/2018 ]

Leafpool (Alt W) ~ For Approval
i tried lmao

04:22, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I thought she wasn't supposed to get the pale chest? Or am I remembering wrong..? Or than that, this is great. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 04:27, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

i’m not sure, i just saw pale markings below her cheek fur, so i just put the pale chest fur.

05:00, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, it said no pale from what I remember. 05:02, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded

15:17, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
when you try your best but you don't succeed

Stunning, Fox. Could you define shading/increase opacity of shading? I can't see it well. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [07:37, 12/29/2018 ]

Re-uploaded thanks. is this any better?

Specks of waste around both hindlegs and foreleg furthest from us as well as base of tail and the back. This is great but another thing, the Deputy and warrior both had texture, and it was more apparent than it is here on the other two mentioned from what I can tell. If you disagree then definitely leave it, but otherwise try to add texture if there is none or define it if there is, I can't tell. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 14:32, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

For Reference to Squid's comment on the waste #1, reference two here .Potato Flakin (talk) 16:12, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

There's also one long stripe coming from each eye to the forehead 16:38, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt A) ~ For Approval
I thought channeling my frustrations from smash bros ultimate would translate into being able to match my own file, but nope haha. All colors and such from the deputy. 16:41, December 29, 2018 (UTC)