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Slightfoot (W) - Declined
Yay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? R a v e n s t e p⋆ 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Better? 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we wait before this is settled? 免得我们还要重做 02:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

No- there's no need, considering it wouldn't be done for a long time.

As far as I'm concerned, the chest is smudged with a hard-edged brush 08:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 01:31, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

he needs texture, and on top of that texture theres dull highlights, and it was all smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 04:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

The chest too, it still looks over-blurred 08:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using the smudge tool in GIMP? I know you said you used GIMP. Use the smudge tool on the white chest. The earpink looks a lot better! Maybe lighten it a bit more? 13:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Oh my, the texture didn't fail… Im insanely proud of this  00:42, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink a bit, and make it less neon-y? 00:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's not neon at all. It blends well perfectly with the fur. 01:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make it more pink than purple please. That's pretty much what Storm was asking, simplified. Just make it a lighter pink on the spectrum. Very nice^^ 13:51, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  17:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I just looked at the apprentice, and I think the patch on his chest is a tiiiiny bit smaller Correct me if I am wrong It could just be my screen though 07:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

But that is the apprentice, which is a smaller blank. 13:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the chest white is fine, so im not changing it yet  19:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's supposed to be small, so please shrink it. While the apprentice blanks are smaller, the patch of white you have on here is much too big.

Re~Upped Ok  22:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I actually saved the image and zoomed it in to see details, and I think I can see a black outline around the white chest and the bottom whisker. There's also a black hard-eged splotch on his back. I like him! Just try to see what I was talking about (might be just my screen) and blur the hind paws shading slightly^^ good job 14:13, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

That's actually normal "waste", per se. Define the light on the front paw closest? 18:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

How is it "waste"? It's on the pelt. 00:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, were you talking about on the warrior or apprentice image, Silver? 00:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I was talking about this warrior image. It could  be just my screen though 00:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Uh yeah... Here world  02:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's a lil bit of waste on the top of the nose; also, make the earpink more triangular. 15:35, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I like this. :)  01:16, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's still a somewhat outline around the white, is it just the shading? But the shading really shouldn't just go around the shape >.> 13:49, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Closest to le lineart or towards his body over there? ===>  14:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Idk, just around the white chest 11:43, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 00:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is still quite neon, and its quite small as well. Maybe expand the earpink back out a ways, and dull down the neon-ness. Make it more dull gray-ish pink, but still have a bit of brightness. 20:27, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Sunstream Strongly Dislikes Earpink. 00:36, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Shrink down the white dash on her chest please. And I'll promote you to an apprentice, since you seem to know what you are doing. 11:38, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Yay thank you! :)  13:40, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:42, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  Oh wow your sig Bramble and Burnt's are like...Identical in colors. 02:02, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

lol, sorry, The base is looking dark greenish brown, any chance you could make it blacker? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 02:05, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think it looks perfectly black 02:26, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

that neck shading needs major lightening or something, and the white patch would be included in that shading. 21:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  01:37, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named Slightfoot.warrior.png. The wiki is case sensitive 07:50, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

Eee it wont let me rename it. :T  22:42, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

No, but I can rename it. =P

Blur the shading on the back foot behind the body and the neck and the face. Looking good ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  15:27, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck area. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:08, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I hope it shows  01:16, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't tell if it's my monitor or not, but it looks like there's a huge blob of black on the neck/muzzle/stomach areas. It starts up on the muzzle, reaches down towards the neck, and then goes on towards the stomach.... It could very well be my monitor, but I'm unsure.

Re~Upped  -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  18:18, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 22:28, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I still see the blob of black. I also think that he's too light- this is more dark gray than black.

I color picked from the apprentice, so the fur is fine, but I shall obliterate the black blob. -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  23:11, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Just because you color picked doesn't necessarily mean you got the actual pelt color. You could've gotten a highlight. When someone says you need to darken it, you darken it. Don't use the 'its fine' thing. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  03:03, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I have oblitterated the blob with mythical erasers. I used my magical pencil tool to darken. -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  22:56, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

No you didn't. It's still there. It's under the white chest flash and on the muzzle too. Storm &#9835;  23:00, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this has been up more than a month, so I have to decline this.

Curlfeather (W) - Declined
Yippie! My first PCA charart! If i shoud make her shorthaired, let me know! 15:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Remove some of the shadow from her hind leg where it curls when she sits, as well as the knob of shadow at the back of her tail; it should be a straight shadow line. Also mind blurring the shadow a bit more? And define the light on the front and hind paw closest to us. 15:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading to the head as well. 16:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch and add a bit more light to the foreleg closest to us. If you want, there's a shading tutorial here 18:11, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more… triangular? And blur it more It might be just me, it looks a little too neon-y 22:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, sorry i haven't had a chance to reupload it yet, i'll do it first thing tomorrow. 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The light could be defined on all the legs tbh 05:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  14:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, use a hard edged blur tool at the rate of 100 14:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reupped- Yay! 14:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)'''

The shading seems to be... disconnected on the back, and it should be connected, so add some shading there. I hope that wasn't too confusing. Also, can you define the light on the legs? 15:13, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped I didn't change the light on the legs because that is how it looked on the shading placement. 15:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking all up his back and in other places too. Define the earpink as well. Sorry if I'm commenting too much. I really like this! 17:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more, please? It's difficult to see. 17:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back. If you're gonna add shading to the back and chest fur and tail, add some to the legs please. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 18:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped- Just re-did all of the shading. @Icebreeze, Don't worry, you can comment all you want :)  19:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, because now the shading is looking... green? I suggest that you shade in black and lower the opacity (you don't have to though) but at least make the shading less greenish. Blur the shading as well. I'm sorry I'm commenting again, you're probably getting really annoyed 20:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped Ugh it isint showing up… You are not annoying me don't worry   22:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lolp at first I thought her name was "Cerealfeather" for some reason :P I see that you're having some problems with the shading, maybe try to make the shading itself smoother, then blue it, if that makes any sense 09:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in and I see some waste around the image. Please remove it. User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:02, April, 20, 2015

Blur and maybe dull the shading a bit more. Also, there's a speck of waste at the very top of the image over the tail 18:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also there's still some shading on her hind leg where it curls when she sits that isn't connected to anything, so if you could get rid of that...? 22:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and then blur the shading more on them 07:52, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, will post soon... 15:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  18:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still need to get rid of the random shadow. It's like right by her underbelly, where the hind leg curls into it towards the knee (?) 18:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I've promoted you to an apprentice, and changed the file name. Caps are very important for these filenames- it should be File:Curlfeather.warrior.png.

Did you set your shading layer to multiply? It might help the shadows look a little more tinted to the base color and natural. If you just shade with black and lower the opacity, it might throw the color off a tad. It's just a suggestion, you don't have to go with it if you don't want 18:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the texture flower with the fur more? Can you lighten the shading? (If Ivy said this, Im sorry I couldn't understand what you said.. sorry  lel 19:42, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  01:41, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it still looks really hard edged 14:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  23:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 14:11, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and lighten the earpink? I can't really see it. 00:53, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped Sorry i did it but forgot to reupload. 00:00, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading and why is there a black spot on his muzzle? 10:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the black spot is shading, and if so, I don't think it should be there. 19:51, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

The color is leaking on ===> this ear, meaning its not all the way to the lineart. 20:25, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

My eyes see no black spot... 00:03, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped I also don't  00:25, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

I don't either. But there is a speck of brightness or something on too of the earpinks shadow...

Could you blur the shading on the neck, the base of the tail, and the front legs just a tiiiny bit, please? 20:05, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

I spy a dark spot on the muzzle. Just below the nose. Unless that was intentional. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:26, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see a dark spot... 02:27, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

There is a dark shaded spot on the muzzle that should not be there since it doesn't go with this lightsource. It's to the left of the whiskers, right below the nose. 09:17, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in to the image, and saw no black spot. 13:37, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty sure they're talking about the patch of shading shown circled in red.

You're all talking about the spot on the muzzle right? If so, that does need to be removed as the light would be coming from that side. Also, define the earpink and perhaps lighten up the shading a few ticks? 06:28, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

I would make the stripes look more life-like and slim. Flame star22  18:58, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

There aren't any stripes- that's texture.

ReUpped Is this what you ment? 22:49, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more 15:58, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink. it looks gray. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:48, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

ReUpped  15:28, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur shading a lot more on the neck and flank 20:09, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on?

ReUpped *Nods head*  14:53, May 13, 2015 (UTC) Ok, i will next upload this on my new account. 01:11, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck under the head, not above the flank/chest. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:45, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, this has been up a month- I have to decline this.

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
What a traitor. 21:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I never read MV yet, so I can't agree with you xD Define the light on his tail-tip? 01:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the shading on the legs and define the ear pink just a little. Yes, Appledusk is a big mouse-brain and I was like too bad when he died 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 12:21, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There should be light on his chest, and I think the shading could be defined and blurred/smudged more. 17:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 18:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking on his tail-tip? 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly I didn't read MV yet but when I saw he was killed my Mapleshade I went like "Beautiful job girl" blur the shading below the chin and the shading is leaking on the shoulder 15:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The shading was leaking in several other spots, too. 20:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I really hate this and I want to do something else, so I'm withdrawing. 23:39, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Even though im not officially in the PCA, can i take over? 23:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

You don't need to ask just reserve it

-ReUpped Ok, my turn. 03:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading way more and change the heading please 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his pelt color. 18:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, please. 23:29, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

here is the base colour for the warrior image. 04:27, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thanks for the colour, Stealthfire :)  01:34, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more until it blends perfectly with the pelt 01:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thankfully i was still online  01:48, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to blur the shading way more than that. Try to use a hard-edged blur tool with the rate of 100 (if you're using GIMP) and blur the edges only. 14:19, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink and define it on the other ear 19:27, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks cut off at the edges (by that I mean there's space between the shading and lineart). Fix that, please. Also, blur the shading a lot more. 21:36 Fri Apr 24

-ReUpped I tried texture too  15:01, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You'll need to remove the texture, sorry. His warrior image doesn't have it, and you need to match that.

Expand the ear-pink in --> this ear and blur/smooth the shading inside the ear 17:40, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Both of the earpinks need to be expanded. The earpink on this blank usually is literally the whole ear. And the shading is leaking a lot around his pelt. 00:52, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't need to be in the whole ear- that's just a preference that many of us do.

-ReUpped  23:49, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is still leaking in quite a few places 00:57, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, please try to be more specific when you're commenting. I'd say the shading on the part where the stomach meets the leg, and the neck are leaking away from the liner art. 02:53, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's also leaking on the stomach on <-- side of the tail-tip. 19:56, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped  23:55, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Its still leaking a liiittle bit on the shoulder by the underbelly and under the chin 00:04, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading A LOT more on the neck and face area? (Im not trying to sound rude :3 ) ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Not on the face please. Only on the neck. 02:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

You need alot more shading on the neck and face area, as Brambleshade said. And, is the black by the ear 'supposed' to be there? Flame star22  19:00, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

The facial shading is fine, tbh. I'm sure the black on the earpink is just shading. Anyway, this image is looking good, but could you blur the shading on ---> leg? 17:42, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped  22:46, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading.

Shading is still leaking under the chin 21:34, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the tail-tip shading, please. 23:43, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Yawn  18:39, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is still leaking under the chin by the back not literally under the chin. 20:16, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define/add shading on the head? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:36, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

-ReUpped  15:16, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Pelt color is leaking in <=== that ear. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:46, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 13:38, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped User:Jinxiy/Sig 22:28, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shadow under his chin above his chest Storm  &#9835;  22:21, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lizardtail (W) - Declined
For the love of Castiel, its so hard to copy off your own work -.-. Not to mention I dont have the apprentice's file anymore, but its my same style of texture I always do. I just dont think the colors are right...I dunno. Comment away~ 23:10, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs and the back ear. Also, I can't see the ear pink (it really blends in with the pelt and I only see a tiny line near the middle of the each), so can you possibly define that just a bit?

Gah, I love that texture. I think you should blur the shading on the neck a teeny more, and define the light on the hind leg. Good job Frosty :) 00:53, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! =) 04:46, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Position the earpink more in the middle of the ear, and maybe make it less gray? Also blur it a bit more 17:20, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

The positioning of it is fine. Jayie does it the same way. And it is pink, and many images have been approved with that color. I will wait for a second opinion on smudging it though. Just this once. 17:48, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smudging it wouldn't hurt- it seems a bit too uniform right now as it is

Define the light on the front paw farthest from us 20:18, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

I'll reupload(this and tweaks) on Monday. Sorry I've been sick since Tuesday. 00:17, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:42, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading and give the shading going up along the spine some depth.

Still working? 13:38, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

One week without uploads- sorry, Dark, you know the rules. I have to decline this.

Curlfeather (K) ~ For Approval
My first character art, I'm so nervous even though there's nothing to be nevervous about! I might redo the brindling on the face (or whatever you'd call that) I'm not sure if I like it. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

You must reserve this on the main page of PCA. I'll do it for you this time. Define the shading on the legs and the tail, this looks good. 00:16, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

My apologies, thank you for letting me know and adding me to the list. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

This should be 'For Evaluation' since you're new. You're not on the project member list, only the table. Are you sure you asked to join beforehand? If not, then you're not allowed to make charart. (I did look first) 02:30, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Anyone can make images, regardless of project membership. That is not required. If they're on the table, then they can make whatever their heart wants, regardless of whether or not they're in the project "member list". As long as it's reserved on the table, then they're fine. .-.

Define the shading overall, not just on the legs and tail. Amazing job for your first that texture is much better than my first attempt. 12:32, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

If I'm correct, the rules say you don't have to be a part of the project to submit art like Snow said. I just put in a request to join regardless, so no worries! P.S. I'll fix and reup it once I'm on my main computer. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Please darken the shading. And sorry about that earlier 21:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on her head just a bit? It might just be my monitor... Looks good! 23:37, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Try to mach File:Curlfeather.warrior.png. I can ask Darkfire to send you the xcf. if you want. 00:49, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

I did use it as a reference, but I'll try and edit it so it looks closer to it. I use SAI for my drawings, so the GIMP file wouldn't really work. 01:11, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:21, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw 08:00, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, I love this shading. Could you define the shading on ---> leg? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 08:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:50, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Soften and expand the shading on the legs 04:49, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading 14:51, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Also add some shading on the bottom back <==== this side of her tail 20:19, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:41, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading where the back paw meets the body ( on >>> this side of the image in the corner) and define it there, seen as with your light source, there should be a shdow there (not much, but a shadow nontheless). Also, blur the shading at the base of the tail. I love this image. :) 21:16 Mon May 11

Reuploaded 19:51, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you dull down your highlights a bit? The warrior image is not that bright. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:48, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:45, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

I know there is probably just light on her, but can you darken up this cutie a tad? -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  23:16, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the forelegs. 20:16, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Rippletail (SC) (K) ~For Approval
I dont know if I named this file correctly.... These blanks are so tiny But the shading looks like crap. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?!

Define the shading on the face and around the front legs. 21:37, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading as well 22:59, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source 23:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Nope, it wasn't named right, so I'll go ahead and fix that for you. ^.^

Define the light on the tail 14:53, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-up woot woot ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw 20:52, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blue the shading 09:40, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

You mean blur, right? Also, maybe lighten it a few ticks? 22:25, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

If I lighten it, its gonna look like there isn't any shading. So Im .. not going to do that :/ ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:04, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, all you need to do it lighten it jussst a tiny bit, by 2 or 3 pixels on the opacity bar and you should be okay. Also, blur the shading on the head. 21:19 Mon May 11

I'm sorry, but I have to decline this. It's been over a week without uploads.

I'll take over. 15:43, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reups changes be here. I like this. 12:02, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
I literally didn't try. 01:38, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck 04:47, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Her back paw looks white. Maybe darken it please? User: Dewdrops56/ talk 13:37, May, 7, 2015

Define the shading on the face and legs, also maybe add some lighting to it? (It's more of a style choice.) 13:41, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Her back paw doesn't look white. It's just because there's no shadow where you're looking. I think it looks fine. Maybe blur the shading on the tail 14:54, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 22:45, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading 12:51, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

The shadow on the back paw should be switched to the other end, I believe, with your light source. Cute! 22:12, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for lack of work 22:24, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

IDK but she looks a little cross-eyed to me... And define the shading on <== that leg 08:11, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

lmao I see it too. Could you define the shading on <==== that leg, and maybe smooth out the neck/chest shading a bit? ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  02:55, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Again, Tiger, you still working on this?

Sneezecloud (W) ~ Declined
what kind of name is sneezecloud 15:07 Sat May 9

A cloud that sneezes. At least not something like Sneezeberry or smth :P Define the light on the legs further from us. I like him! :DDD 15:13, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body 01:52, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't understand why I need to define light on legs that would be in shadow in this pose...? I'll get to the body shading thing right away, though. 06:42 Sun May 10

Maybe define the earpink? I can barely see it. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:08, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

There would be a tiny bit of light on his back paw by his toes in this light source 14:55, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading needs defined overall. 15:22, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Fox already said that, Ravenpelt. Please be careful not to comment what's already been said. 15:43, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I changed what I said. I was abit of a zombie this morning, probably shouldn't be on here when I'm that tired. 16:13, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't need to change the source, it's fine. people have been using it for longer than a lot of people have been here. >.> 05:54, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Declined. Its been a week without uploads. Sorry Berry. 13:41, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Birch (Ro) ~ For Approval
ah yes only i can ever 100% match my patterns correctly 22:26, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Nice, please unsmudge the stripes in the middle of his side? Like you can see two lines there. If you get what I mean... If not I can circle them 07:24, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

the stripes on his kit were smudged similarly so i'll let this slide o3o 09:56, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

These two lines only I meant. =) 10:13, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

can you shade the nose or something? it looks odd being so bright with the shading as it is. 19:43, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

i've tried throwing the nose under the shading layer but i'd be told to make it more visible because it'd look thesame as the pale markings under there, therefore i think it's okay, but i'll re-up w/ the stripes 18:48, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 19:29, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to put it under that shading layer. Just make a new one that only shades the nose.

re-up  14:15, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I still see those two smudge lines in the middle of his side- did you not get those when Bramblesnow pointed them out? They really stand out and it kinda bugs me.

re-up 10:17, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Seedpelt (W) ~ For Approval
I copy pasted the deputy into new lineart, with the tail being the obvious exception 19:35, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

oohh very purtty, Skt! Define the shading on the chest/under the chin just a touch more and define the light on the tail 02:06, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 13:43, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. yes, I've been busy. 15:45, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Apprentice) ~ For Approval
Tell me if it needs the nick!

There's waste by the head area. It needs the nick, since it's the alt image, and it has the nick anyway. Also, you need silver on the tail-tip and muzzle, as it has to match the other images. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  22:36, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reups!: Better?

If this is the one for TUG then it shouldn't have the nick, as she's shown without it...

Darken and define the shading 08:52, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

I'll fix the shading, but please make up you're mind about the nick

No, she doesn't get the nick. Please remove it. 12:18, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, I have to redo her do...

No you don't, just overlay the linear art over the old one, on a new layer. then fill in the gaps 22:33, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

I lost the file I what I mean...

Withdrawing lel, I cant do her right...

I'll take over. 21:01, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The colors are all from the queen alt. 21:17, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 02:28, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:34, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Flowerpaw (A) ~ For Approval
I suppose I can post this now. She was so fun to do! ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:03, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? She's as pretty as her name suggests! 22:14, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the most visible hind paw's shading? 22:26, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ Stormsong  Let it storm&#9835;  01:06, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the depth of the shading- it appears flat.

Reups ~ Stormsong  Let it storm&#9835;  16:42, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Switch the shading on the tail to the other side of it, to match the rest of your light source. 02:27, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  02:34, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Oatclaw (W) ~ For Approval
Oatmealclaw. All I can say is I tried. Sorry Jayie I'm afraid I ruined your character :o 15:17, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on each leg ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:51, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  10:37, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten his base pelt just a teeny tiny bit- the apprentice looks slightly lighter. Or, alternatively, I'm sure Jayie would gladly give you the colors should you think you need them. I think it matches just fine.

re-ups I kinda think she added the highlights? I actually tried it out but it sucked even more than thise :P I brightened the base color slightly though 11:01, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit, and possibly add a few more? Also, I have the files for several of Jayie's images, and none of them use highlights. Presumably the same holds true for Oatclaw. 16:21, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Shinx is right, I never use highlights, only shading. This looks really good. :) I'd be happy to send you the files, if you can give me an email to send them to. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:17, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Phew, I decided not to add highlights because it looked not right, and I was correct :) bramble.snow@gmail.com is my email 10:17, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 13:29, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. W) - For Approval
- She was called "silvery-white", which describes a base color 00:59, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. Just beautiful. Can you blur the shading more? -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  01:23, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:39, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light/shading on the tail? 06:45, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 08:10, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:36, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Add more light to the back legs and define the shading depth. 13:44, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:48, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Birchkit (TAQ) (Kit) - For Approval
This is beige, right? A sort of light brown-cream? I'm pretty happy with how this turned out. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:12, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

-kneels onto the ground- Teach me your mystic ways of Character Art, Master! Ok, but to be serious I'd reccomend darkening and defining the shading overall, it's barely there. Other then that it looks great, I love the markings! 13:46, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Beige is a khaki-like color, so yes, it looks about the right shade. Can you define the ear pink? I'm having trouble seeing it.

Reuploaded. Aw, thanks. :D I darkened the shading, and made the ear pink darker and more saturated. Does it stand out better now? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:14, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Yay, it's my birthday! :D I honestly think he could be darkened if he is dark grey. 07:59, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Happy birthday, Burnt!! =) This is a lovely image. Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit, though?

Re-upped thank you =P 08:20, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Happy birthday! Hope you have a great day. Anyway, smudge/blur the tail shading a tiny bit, and possibly define the eye depth? 15:12, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks :) 04:23, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Berryheart (K) ~ For Approval
wee~ Probably won't be able to upload on weekdays but I /can/ update on Fridays. <: 14:23, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

It needs a white neck like the other images. And define the light on the legs, and tail Storm  &#9835;  14:25, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

oh god it's disgusting ;;  14:33, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, tail, and the chest please you forgot those Storm  &#9835;  14:41, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

it's still horrible  14:57, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

There's literally still no light on the legs/paws. get rid of some shadow Storm  &#9835;  15:02, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Shrink the white on her front paws, please. They only look that way on the queen because of how long her legs are.

'''Better? ''' 15:26, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define and add depth to the shading? The image is looking kind of flat. Good job on this though! 15:35, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Ice, when you say "The image looks flat", you mean define the shading everywhere, right? Because I think that needs a bit more work upon touching :) Good job with smudging. Very nice. 18:36, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I hate shading ;_;  19:11, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

You are still forgetting to put light on the legs. Define the light on the chest and tail and define the shading on the side of her face... This charart is literally all shading. Define the light everywhere. Storm &#9835;  22:37, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

The white is looking a little grey on my screen… maybe lighten it? Idk whether it is only my phone 06:56, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

It isn't just your screen, it's really gray, add some highlights? Are you using pure white? 11:48, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ferntail (Ki) ~ For Approval
16:09, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading between the tummy and on the leg as well. Looking good Storm  &#9835;  16:13, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head, and the light on the back paw. Cutie! 17:19, May 18, 2015 (UTC)