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Waspwhisker (KP) -Redone
The texture was a pain, and it was hard to make it as gawjus as the warrior charart, and I think I failed. xDD Not sure if changes are showing. 22:19, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white?

Re-uploaded  22:06, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on his front leg and haunch? Maybe lighten it on the paws since the white is beginning to look gray. 23:02, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  01:13, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

There's a tad of waste under the front paw and to --> side of the head. Nice Work Thistle. c: 07:52 Thu Apr 18

The highlights are a bit bright, tone them down some? 00:22, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It wasn't waste, it was bits of lineart that turned gray somehow o.O 22:37, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his front leg a tad. 23:17, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:30, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Clovertail (Q Alt.2 ) - Tweaked
OA was Oblivion, tweaked to be less golden, and white to be less grey. I hope she doesn't look redone. 01:34 Sat Apr 20

Blur the shading some more? Bb un   legs  01:36, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:37 Sat Apr 20

I think I see weird lines of lineart on her back foot, not sure if that shoul be there.. 05:17, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading to make it blend more a bit. c:  23:28, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:19 Sun Apr 21

Blur the shading even more. 00:20, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:27 Sun Apr 21

Lighten the shading on the legs a bit? They look too dark compared to the others. Bb un   legs  15:57, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Shading darkness is artist's choice. Personally, I think it looks really cool.

Vixenkit (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Wildfire, tweaked to add shading due to its flatness. Comments?

Blur the chest highlight. 20:20, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  20:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Stormfur (W) ~ Tweaked
Same as Grasspelt.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but if the light source is from the top, then shouldn't there not be any light on the front legs? 22:50, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly don't know, Tai. Someone want to answer this that knows about this light source? I've seriously only used it one other time. o.o

Whitewing (W) - Tweaked
Comments for Whitewing? I couldn't get the files from 'teldy so yeah... 21:34 Mon Apr 22

Whiten her up a bit more? She still looks kinda gray. Bb un   legs  21:35, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 21:39 Mon Apr 22

Okie, now blur the shading a little? Bb un   legs  21:41, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:49 Mon Apr 22

Owlfur (W) ~ Tweaked
OA be Misty, tweaked to whiten white. Changes may or may not be showing. Comments? Bb un   legs  21:52, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Could you add a "highlight" to those paws, and that'll whiten then up just a little more? 01:25, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-up. Bb un   legs  01:32, April 23, 2013 (UTC)'''

Shading on the paws is extremely flat. Try and fix it?