Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 14

Ruby (Ki) - Approved
Scourge's sister who we all know is responsible for him turning evil...comments anyone?

Something is bothering me about the collar. Should I take it out entirely, or is there some way I could fix it? --Sparrowsong 03:51, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Try shading the bottom half of the collar to fix it. ;) I think she's great. -- MU MB LE 785  16:41, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I'll go do that.

You really like it? Thanks! *Touched* Sparrowsong 16:58, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

UPDATE: I shaded it a bit, but it's a little hard to tell. It'll probably take a while for the changes to show up. --Sparrowsong 17:06, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - How can something that evil be so cute? Try adding a highlight on the tag, like I did with Tiny. Seeing as it is made of metal, it would be highly reflective. Also, blur your shading a bit more. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 17:19, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploading. Thanks for your tip. Sparrowsong 17:35, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

P.S. Sorry if it takes me a while to reply - my computer is extremely slow. Like, EXTREMELY.

I luffles her! NOw, the only thing I can see is maybe add a little bit more shading on the right side of her right leg, in that area above her paw. If you don't know what I'm talking about, I can whip up a diagram in less than 5 minutes within the time I see the comment. ;) -- MU MB LE 785  20:23, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Kay, I'll get right on it. Sparrowsong 21:57, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Is the shading in the right part of her foot? Sparrowsong 00:32, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments? Anyone...? Sparrowsong 04:21, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Sparrow. The shading's in the right places, just make it all a little thicker and blend it all in. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:02, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Alright. I'll upload it as soon as I can. Sparrowsong 05:14, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Better? Sparrowsong 05:38, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Please don't claw my fur off, but I think that the shading is too light. Make it a bit lighter and make blend it more.Minnowclaw 12:48, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I think you meant too dark, Minnow. But yes, lighten the shading just a bit and blur the transition. Also make the shading a bit more thin on the legs, and add shading underneath the collar; there would be a shadow there. She's very pretty, though. -- Bramble My Realm 14:50, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Sparrowsong 17:38, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful. Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 15:33, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

There seems to be an odd lighter line on the left shoulder? I can circle it, if needed. :\-- Quiet !... 03:54, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

I'll get right on it.  Jane Volturi ( talk! ) 03:56, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploading. Better?  Jane Volturi ( talk! ) 04:05, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. -- Bramble My Realm 02:53, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Approved. -- Bramble My Realm 14:49, 17 August 2009 (UTC)