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Raggedpelt (W) - For Approval
This is my first try at doing a charart, so I'm sorry if it's really bad/if I did it wrong. How is it?Hollytail 00:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, first; the lineart is really strange, it's white, it should be black. Second, you need to save it in png format, not jpg. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

How do I fix the lineart? And could that have anything to do with the fact that I had issues with getting the blank onto pixlr?Hollytail 01:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did you delete the white inside the blank before you put the brown in? And what kind of trouble did you have? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Right-click->open in new tab for the image, and then you can edit it. The images in the gallery are shrunken a bit. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 01:25, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Over the area with the blanks it says to click to get the image at full size, but whenever I tried that, it wouldn't let me place it in pixlr, or save it to pictures. It came up in a box in the center of the screen and all that it would let me do was highlight it...Eventually I just used the thumbnail picture...Hollytail 01:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, you can't do that. Copy the file name of the blank and place it into the search bar. Then, go to the page and get the location, and you're good to go! Other than that, the image looks nothing like  Møųş  ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  01:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried fixing it in the right blank this time... How does it look now?Hollytail 02:30, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Use the color dropper to get the right coat color- he is still far too dark. And his stripes don't match the leader image. Don't worry, that problem is easy to fix. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  04:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Or use the sponge tool set to saturate on size 200 will do. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail 12:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still weird...Layer a regular warrior blank on the image. The shading needs more blurring and so does the stripes. And, the ear pink needs to be lighter. Ice Spring is here! 15:45, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Tried fixing it, but what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Why did you blur the ragged fur lines? Those should be solid! ☮Quail☮ Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 15:36, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, sorry... is this better? And what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:51, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

The eye doesn't look right...look at this or this to see how it should look.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:33, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is really blurred and there is some missing on the head and paws. Also darken and blur the shading. Add another stripe to the haunch and try making it more brown like his leader image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:39, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I can say this but; it's been 5 days since you've worked on this. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:50, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

You can say it but this user still has time as we wait a week. Sakura Kiss Haikage 17:54, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Eek, Sorry! I worked on it, but I didn't realize that I didn't re-upload it. Oops... Sorry! Anyway, better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The line art still needs to be fixed and his pelt should be a darker. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:55, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

What's wrong with the line art and how do I fix it?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the picture! LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:04, April 14, 2010 (UTC) The lineart near his back ear is missing where it connects with his head. The lineart near his hind leg and tail are smudged too. you can see brown pixels. Just past a new lineart on top of it and clean it up some if there's extra sitting outside of it.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:45, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I would highly reccomend redoing this. LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:22, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I could try to fix the lineart for you if you'd like. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 19:58, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to redo it, how does it look now?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:32, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

The lineatr is good but im not sure what the dark brown smudges in his pelt are. Is it supposed to be shading? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:42, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think they are. Blur the shading, lengthen the stripes and make them less dark like the leader image, and make the ear pink more triangular. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:14, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

The large blob of shading in the middle of his haunch needs to go away. Perhaps you might want to check one of the tutorials? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:27, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes and blur the shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:32, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to fix it, how does it look now?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to lengthen the stripes. 雨 晶須  15:27, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC) The colour is a little dark and there are more stripes needed in places. The ear pink is a little bright and/or needs blurring and the raggedy-fur lines look too... similar; as in they are all the same shape and size as each other. ✐Sa NdY  17:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also, he needs a torn ear (unless he got that after he became deputy?) 雨  晶須  21:20, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 01:24, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

He looks more dark ginger than brown now. Blur the stripes some. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:35, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is right. What you need to do is save his leader or deputy pic and use the eyedropper tool to get the right color because it looks like your having trouble with the color. Also, the tip of the ear facing us is gray. Erase that.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:42, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:54, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah,just blur the ear pink a little more. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:00, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:59, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be blurred more, I don't see any shading or highlights, and the haunch seems empty. Add stripes on the haunch. Quailflight 06:53, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:28, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is really bright. Make it softer, like his leader image. <font color="#99badd">Cool Blue Reason: <font color="#191970">Wrapped Around Your Throat  22:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see much shading at all, but maybe thats just me... And I agree, soften the ear pink a bit. -- Quiet !...  03:08, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:20, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 03:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more of a reddish color and blur it. Also, the nick in the ear doesn't seen realistic. I can fix it for you if you like or just ....... er it's hard to explain I would say maybe thicken the lineart around the nick? What do others say?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:57, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if the nick looks any better, but I tried to fix it. Anyways, better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few small stripes to the top of his head. BLur the earpink as well. Quailflight 08:20, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what program you're using, but you need to take the burn tool (looks like a hand) and run it over the back, chest, tail, and head. That will add some good shading. You also need to blur the ear pink quite a bit and the also the stripes. -- Bram ble  03:38, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:30, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be triangular.  Snickers  19:41, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:09, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:23, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I feel really bad that my rubbishy Raggedstar image is so hard to copy... I thought I'd give you a few tips about how I made the leader image which may help you get the colours and shading right. I paint-bucketed the main colour and then used the burn tool to add shading - with a size 15 brush - and then used the burn tool again (both times on midtones) to paint the stripes on with a size 5 brush and blurred. I think the problem you have is not that the stripes are too light, but rather that they are the wrong colour.

Also, the raggedy-fur look needs to be more raggedy. You need to rough it up a bit and make it a little less regular; at the moment yours are all very straight v-shapes, try and vary it a little and make it more sruffy! =) Hope this helps. ✐Sa  NdY  19:15, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Rename the image Raggedstar.warrior.png -<font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:54, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

O.K, I'm not sure I did that right, because now it's saying that this is a duplicate of the Raggedpelt (W), but it's been named Raggedpelt.warrior.png.<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:22, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and add more along the body, head and tail. Darken the shading a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:09, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is a white pixel on the chest. Snow storm  23:57, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:59, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

darken the shading some and add some to the legs farthest from us. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:46, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - For approval
ok its my first charat ever. I know it's bad but still..... Comments? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  16:12, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but even with two discussions this is over the limit of 35. Just when I thought we had that problem sorted... Declining as I'm fed up with having to clean up the page already today. Please resubmit this when the page goes below 35 images. Thanks Snickers, and it's not just you so don't feel bad. ✐Sa NdY  16:19, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Its quite good but as Sandy said,below 35. Clar ris  sa! :)  17:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It might have changed since Sandy's comment but this is the 35th image. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So, is it ok? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  19:49, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's fine now. The background needs to be transparent, not black though. ✐Sa NdY  19:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded Better? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  20:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

wait. I have this reserved. Can't i do her? Echo Kit  21:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Echo your reservation is over two weeks old. Snickers has the right to do this image . Haikage Ash's Talk 21:23, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

oh... I was about to but her up but oh well. Echo Kit  21:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lining on the right ear is not there, and I can't see the highlights really well. What program did you use? ~Ec hos  tar  22:04, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is gaps in the line art in various places.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 22:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded crosses fingers Better?

It looks as if you're using paint to do this image. You need to use pixlr of some other image program. The shading needs to be blurred. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading more. Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  11:23, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

You are familiar with blurring, right? And some of the lineart was drawn over. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 22:53, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * It looks as if you tried to draw some of the lineart back...The ear pink needs to be blurred around the edges and this white is too bright so the shading won't show up as much and it'll make it harder. Look at her other images for reference:



To make it easier for you use the color droppler so you can take the base color from one of these images. Don't take the shading at all though and you are using pixlr right? Because it still looks as if you're using paint. If not there's always GIMP you can download :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  22:27, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I'm using pixlr. I'll work on it : ) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  22:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm on vacation and pixlr does not work. : ( I'll fix it when I go home. (which is in 2 days :) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  00:03, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded What! every time I try to change it on Pixlr it stays the same! = ( Snickers!  Meeow!  I am such a furball.  I ♥ the Warriors wiki!  22:17, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I sugust you redo it. The shading looks like you sprayed it on using Paint. You need to burn it on using the burn on pixlr. Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:20, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I'll redo it. I'll have it done soon. Silverstar

If you want, I can help you re-thicken the lineart. Otherwise, just do what everyone else said above. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:10, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Computer problems.... Getting it fixed tomorow. Right now I'm at the Library.*sigh* Sni  ck  ers  20:04, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid it so is it any better? Sni ck  ers  04:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still looks as if its painted on. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 04:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I promise by StarClan I was using pixlr Sni  ck  ers  04:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Im not saying that your not using pixlr. I'm saying that it looks like you're using the paintbrush instead of the burn tool. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 04:36, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry :S The burn was weelll kinda weird with me Sni  ck  ers  13:35, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

You seemed to have smudged part of the lineart, like near the forelegs. I can help you fix that if you want. 雨 晶須  15:26, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think looks good, but I see a bit of stuff like smuged fur and I also see you accidentally blured the tail and the chest together, making it look mixed up. But other than that, it is SO cute!

p.s. I have a cat

Graystripefan 14:48, April 22, 2010 (UTC)☞Graystripefan☜

Reuploaded Can someone remove the gray background for me because when I did that it wouldn't let me save it cause who knows why...So apart from that any better? <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  22:33, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Parts of the lineart seem to be missing. Just copying the original kit lineart, making the white parts transparent, and lining it up on a new layer over it should do the trick. (: -- Quiet !...  03:15, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Umm.. Layer? <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  19:12, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm... Whats a layer? Spri ngs  tar  20:22, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Copy and paste the lineart over this image. Make sure you delete the white pixels around it. There are lots on the kit blanks-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid her. Didn't like it before. So Commentos? Spri ngs  tar  11:54, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is...blotchy and I don't see any eye color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  13:27, April 25, 2010 (UTC)I'll Work on her  Snickers

Reuploaded Layers.. Hmmm I tried :/ Spri  ngs  tar  19:55, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

The background is gray, it needs to be transparent  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:25, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yay! Fixed! Spri ngs  tar  20:36, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

That is better :) Okay, darken and blur the shading, make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and color the nose in  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:56, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It won't blur any more. Spri ngs  tar  22:05, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?  ★Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 19:04, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on her left (our left) foreleg. Looks good, otherwise:) -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ          ö        19:37, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I see. I'll get to work on this tomorow. S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 20:37, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sil ver paw  Chase that mouse!  18:54, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice! Just add some shading to the top of her head, and try to smooth out other shading with the blur tool. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:57, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is shading on her head and I'll try and blur it more. Snic  kers   10:52, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It can not blur any more. Snic  kers   23:05, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?<span style="color:Orchid;Font-family:FangSong;Background:Aqua;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Orchid">Silverclaw Goldenface  19:15, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone??? Skittles! Love that Rainbow!

My best call for it is to start over. The shading hasn't gotten any better over the course of the month that you've had it up. Restart with a long-haired, female kit blank, just as you did before. When you poen it in your editing program, create the eyes like this: File:AllEyesPtI.png, except do it with the blue color you used. Then select the burn tool, set the size on nine pixels, the range in highlights, and the exposure on 40%. Then run the blur tool down the sides, the head, the edge of the tail, the forelegs, and the one hindpaw. Do the ear pink and nose color as you had done. Bram ble  23:03, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC)-For Approval
Here she is! Second sharpclaw! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, why am I so slow!? I really want to put my charart up! Image wise, this is good. Just blur the shading and highlights. Also, darken the earpink and make it smaller. But this is good.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:06, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Note: I am dping this while Briarlight is being worked on :) Blurred shading and made the Ear Pink darker and smaller. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:29, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading... Could you make it more noticeable??? I think you blurred it a little to much... Mo onp  elt   ۞  18:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about that Moonplet. :) I think I got over-excited. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:24, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Sakura Kiss Haikage 14:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Largened Ear Pink. Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:30, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Center it some more. Sakura Kiss Haikage 19:29, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Centered it. Sorry it took me so long, my laptop wouldn't let me upload it. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  09:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading more visiable;thefore, darken it. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:06, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, darken the shading and/or add some highlights. ✐Sa NdY  17:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:07, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was talking to Sandy and Shruugy on the IRC and they said to show what my shading normaly looks like. Here it is. Dapple star  10:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, that doesn't look too dark to me. It just needs blending. ✐Sa NdY  12:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's horrible though. :( Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  12:45, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are hard to see, and the bottom of the earpink could be blurred. Quailflight 08:18, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have attempted to blur the shdng, but have failed, also I've brightened highlights. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:32, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:25, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''I've redone her but it won't let me upload her! I've done everything that has been said but I can't do it!!! Sorry, I'll try A.S.A.P Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:47, May 8, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded Finally. I used Insane's way of layering the image and its worked!!! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:45, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments.....? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and more triangular. Right now it looks like a circle at the bottom of the ear. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:59, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) Up for approval
Well, here he is! Open for comments now. Butterfly } { Song!  13:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The image is a redlink at present. ✐Sa NdY  13:48, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I KNOW. I can't open the file! I'll try again. Please wait Butterfly }  { Song!  14:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Butterfly } { Song!  14:29, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  14:49, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

In the future, don't use caps, because it's like shouting. I do see the eye color, just that the highlight in the eye seems a bit big. Also, blur the stripes and shading on the tail. -- 雨 晶須  15:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Needs eye colour! :3 Dawnleaf 14:45, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

The eye color is there, but whoever made these blanks made the highlights just as big as the eye color space. And I'm sorry, I won't use caps in the future. Butterfly } { Song!  19:05, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think he had the nick in his ear when he was an apprentice. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:22, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, he might've. Thistleclaw was a pretty tough mentor.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:29, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

As for the image, you should use a tutorial or an apprentice pic like Frostfur's for the eyes.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:26, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I still think this is good for my third attempt (I think of it as my first because it's the only one that was up for more than one day). I origionally made him with the scars on his muzzle, but painted over them because he got them later. Butterfly } { Song!  01:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

You still haven't put coloring in the eyes. He should have amber. Quailflight 16:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try to copy the eyes from another apprentice image like Shrewpaw. If not, I can do it for you.-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:35, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait. How's this? I changed the eye highlight to the eye color... Butterfly }  { Song!  14:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some eye-white. Bring up an apprentice image on your art program, and zoom ito his/her face. That should help with the eye color, pupil, and eye-white positions  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:50, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see a pupil. Just *a glint of amber eyes* xD Spri  ngs  tar  20:40, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

There is a pupil, and the eye white was preventing everyone from seeing his eye color. Make up your mind please! Butterfly } { Song!  16:09, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

No one said get rid of the eye highlight just change it's placement. Do what Night said look at some of the approved apprentice chatarts and copy the eye from there. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 16:33, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Or look here for how to do the eye. 雨 晶須  21:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedThank you for the Tutorial! I needed that, and I'll use it ffr. Butterfly } { Song!  16:40, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth(D)- For Approval
Decided to do something different. Comments? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  22:14, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Just blur his back shading more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:22, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading as much as I could. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  20:46, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks good. Clar ris  sa! :)  16:27, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch and back leg.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:37, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:22, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's only been two days, be sure to wait at least five to six says before asking for comments. As for the image, this is very good :) Just darken the stripes more on the face  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Sorry, and thanks! Is it too dark? εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:40, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, right now it's the same color as his stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:28, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Snow storm  00:34, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be here from tomorrow till May 16, so please don't decline when I'm gone. :) εСћб  ђэάѓτ  10:21, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) - Withdrawn
he looks terribble he has some errors but i will fix them Iceyfang 21:31, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

You used the thumbnail instead of the full sized blank. Remake it using that. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 21:38, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded Iceyfang 21:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Add more shading around the body, blur it, make the ear pink more....pinkish. Blur the highlights and add more stripes. -- Ice The stars will light your path...

reuploded Iceyfang 22:14, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Blur the stripes and darken the earpink and shading and blur them.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:49, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to look more like his elder image.. -- Quiet !...  23:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Needs an eye.(As in color,pupil.) <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  00:00, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

It's not terrible, Iceyfang! But the ear looks too fake, and smudge the stripes.-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  11:48, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded iceyfang  15:18, April 23, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Blur the ear more and blur his back. Also,why is the colour overlapping the lineart,did you blur it a little too much? Apart from this,its not terrible,its great! Clar ris  sa! :)  16:36, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 01:27, April 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The tabby stripes are too dark and the ear pink is too bright. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   01:57, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 10:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 13:38, April 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Woah...What happened to the stripes?They are too light,and I can see dark stripes under. Well apart from that really good! <span style="color:Goldenrod;Font-family:Comic Sans MS;Background:Black;Border:2px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; Color:Goldenrod">Smoke on the water Fire in the sky☼  19:41, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 00:25, April 25, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The stripes are too dark, copy them from his elder image. His earpink appears to be purple-pink, and I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  00:50, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

the stripes are wayyyyy to dark try making them like his elder image for instance...make his stripes 2 more shadings than his pelt colorLionClaw132 03:49, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon.  Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 21:12, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Snickers, users have a period of one week before we give them the decline warning. Iceyfang has two more days.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:47, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oops sorry =| Anyway I sugest that you make the pelt lighter and the stripes darker. Silverclaw  We will,We will rock you... 23:04, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

sorry i havn't been on ive been school work but then i have to do a show so i wont be working on this much <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 13:06, May 1, 2010 (UTC)iceygang


 * The lineart is blurred on his back side near his tail.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 03:22, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * i cant get to work on this for 2 weeks but do not decline this can some else do it for now <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 03:46, May 2, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang


 * I'd be happy too, unless if I need to wait on Darkstripe being approved..--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:04, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you're using the paintbrush tool to do the stripes. I believe that you're supposed to use the pencil tool. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 15:38, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

As Iceyfang has given up rights to the image and asked for someone else to do it, someone can work on the image even if their own is up for approval. I would, but I don't have a lot of time these days. First come, first serve; whoever would like to do the image gets to if they speak up first. Bram ble  04:03, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'll take this. Poppydawn is in the 24h stage right now, so I hope it's okay. Do I have to put it under my reserved chararts?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:08, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I re-did this image. Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:37, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really want to do this charart any longer. Withdrawing-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:37, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'll do it, if I can. -- Icestorm Peace 23:50, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

That's fine.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:07, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Owlstar (W) - For Approval
How is he? He's my third one. I'm finally starting to get used to making chararts! Comments?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:25, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  23:36, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 01:09, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the front of his haunch. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:45, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Where, exactly should I add the shading?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:51, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

The front of the haunch, where the little dab of shading is touching. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:38, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added haunch shading.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:43, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:49, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred shading. -- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:53, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thought the haunch shading needed more blurring.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:01, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thought all the shading needed some blurring. -- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:05, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:42, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is he ready?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:43, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Looks ready to me-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:05, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:22, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds - For Approval
I will say that Moonpelt's version was very good, and I'll remember to put the rank after my charart next time. I guess I didn't think I needed it since Chasing Clouds has only one known rank. Anyways, comments?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh...blur the shading on his gray parts and darken the shading on the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:46, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good....blur the gray. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred some line art on the ear. <span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 13:51, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add some grey to the face. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:39, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart's blurred in several places. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:21, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more gray patches all over-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:27, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading on the gray parts, darken the white shading, fixed the blurred lineart on the ear and some other places, and added gray to the face and other parts.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:14, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks weird. Quailflight 09:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's blurred a lot. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:00, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where exactly do you see it blurred? Maybe it's obvious to you, but I can't tell. My computer crashed a few days ago and I have limited time on my brother's computer, so I can't really look over to see exactly where it's blurred.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:52, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Around the head and tail, I think. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:29, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to working on it soon.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:27, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If there are still blurred places, I can fix that. Also, any other problems?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:19, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * The lineart still looks blurred...maybe its this computer as its not my own. Its like fuzzy where it touches the color and it seems almost blurred to the gray patches. Blur the patches more too.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I went over all the fuzzy places and fixed them. Also blurred the patches into the white part a little more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * The white patches on the tail are very grey and the shading needs thickening and blending all over. ✐Sa  NdY  16:09, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:20, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * The shading on his gray patch on his back needs to be blurred more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:39, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (Q)-For Approval
This is one thing............. an epic fail. XP Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:32, Apr<font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:27, May 13, 2010 (UTC)il 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 00:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, and add a few to her legs  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:14, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

When I did darken the stripes, it didn't match her warrior image and messed the whole picture up. The stripes on the leg are there, you just can't see them very well because of the shading. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:09, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I still think that you should darken the stripes in the shaded area. The shading would darken the stripes. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 19:27, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened leg stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 22:15, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Keep blurring the stripes, because it looks like they've only been blurred over once. Here's a trick:

If it looks like it won't blur anymore, press the mouse again and keep repeating until the blurring is perfect. Quailflight 10:49, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes more. Comments? Snow storm  23:01, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes have no highlights- they seem to go over the shading and highlights you put- they look drawn on. Could you fix that? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   20:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I understand what you are saying. Do I have to redo the image? Or is there a way to fix it? Snow storm  20:53, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Well, acually Mouse, that's the way I do my tabbies. I do the shading and highlights first, then I do the stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

A lot of people do that but it only works if you use the burn tool for stripes. You should do the stripes first if you paint them on. As for the image if you're careful you can just highlight that area. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 13:30, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I used the pencil tool to put the stripes on :3 What should I do? I also did it the way Night did it. Is it ok? Snow storm  18:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading again. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:15, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I never darkened the shading before, and if I do the stripes wont be visible. Snow storm  03:05, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:31, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Snow  storm  23:55, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:27, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I won't blur anymore. Snow storm  16:44, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * I blurred it a touch for you (if you don't like it then revert it), but you're right; to do so any more would blur it right into the pelt and it wouldn't be seen. I think you've done a great job with this. -- Sandy star 11:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you, Sandy :3 I thought I would fail because this was my first tabby. Thank you, also, for blurring it. Snow storm

Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 14:37, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstripe (W) - For Approval


I believe this is along my lines of fail...it took forever to get those stripes to match his other image, but it was worth it. Comments?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:37, April 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * I know I shouldn't be here.... but not fail Shimmer, stunning. ✐Sa  NdY  21:40, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy, *waggles finger* get off the computah XD Shimmer, this looks awsome! The stripes look as if they were smudged instead of blurred though, so maybe blur them some more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:52, April 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated...and *gasps* Now Sandy, even I know you shouldn't be here lol. Finish those exams because mine are coming up in two weeks. I'll be in your situation soon :P How is this? I'm beginning to fly though images again o.o better find someone else now...--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:18, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe on the haunch seems a bit smudged. Maybe darken it a tiny bit. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 22:35, April 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * Darken him just a tad. How's this?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 02:54, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Highlights need blurring.  Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   20:47, May 1, 2010 (UTC)


 * This is the best I can do. Anymore and I'll start messing up the stripes.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:03, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Could you perhaps lighten the patch on his nose? It's hard to see the lineart there. And I know I colored his nose pink in the rogue image, but to be consistent, I think we decided to just leave the warrior nose black. Also, his eyes are blue in the rogue version. Darkstripe seems to have his eye color change many times; they've been mentioned as yellow, blue, and brown.. I think. Sorry about the trouble you had with the stripes; it was my style you had to try and copy. -- Bram ble  22:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * His eyes are golden on rogue image Bramble, see: Darkstripe_(R).png And its fine :) I like to challenge myself. I kind of had to highlight the top of his head again so it could blur in well.Updated--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:59, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the highlights. Mist cloud  20:58, May 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 03:20, May 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * I think he's a little too dark. Lighten him up a bit. His stripes are amazing, though! 雨  晶須  13:56, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Updated--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:37, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the golden eyes mishap; I was looking at the one saved on my computer, which had blue eyes. :) On the image, his midriff has some black stripes that are awful close in color to the lineart; lighten those up a bit. Same thing for the stripe along his lower back; lighten that just a touch. Bram  ble  03:38, May 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:55, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 23:09, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * Done--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:40, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:52, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (A) - For Approval


I don't like Robinwing, so I erased it. I'm at school, so this isn't finished..-- ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  03:06, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

As I believe has been said numerous times before, you never blank a section; you put 'withdrawn' in place of 'for approval' and let one of the senior team archive it. You never erase it. I also uploaded your image in accordance with the new naming policy; Tallpoppy.apprentice. Your image isn't finished yet, so I'll hold my comments for now. -- Bram ble  03:33, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, this looks like a speckled (whatever LOL) cat and here description says tabby, add some color to the eye, add some shading and highlights if you want to, akso some ear pink, and blur the markings after you make them tabby stripes. (sorry if they are tabby stripes : Add stripes to the tail, the foreleg thats farthest away from us, some on thee tail, and some on the back leg closes to us. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   13:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's not done with the image; in her first message it says that she was at school when she did it.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:59, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D) -- For Approval
I'm hiding under my bed, if you need me. But since there are a lot of images in the CBA stage, I think I'm safe. → •Maple  fern•  ←  23:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Great job! The only thing I see is the ear pink and the white/brown transition could be blurred some more. 雨 晶須  01:06, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome job, Maple :) Blur the shading and highlights, make the white on his chest stretch up higher, and add a few stripes to his face; in addition to what Blackclaw said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:24, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Again, when I state 35, I mean 35. That doesn't mean put up another when images are in CBA or if they're being declined. It means put it up when there's room. Anyway, the images is good. I don't see anything other than what has already been stated. -- Bram ble  22:42, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Bramble, I shall not do it again. Anyway, it's fixed. → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:54, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, lighten the ear pink, I can barely see it and darken/add shading to the head. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 12:13, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add more shading to the legs, also. And maybe blur the highlights more? Dark hallows 21:16, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred higlights, darkened shading on legs, added shading to head, lightened earpink. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:37, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:21, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make his eyes a bit paler. Add more stripes to the base of the tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Redwillow (A) - For Approval
Well, some images are in the CBA stage, and mine should get approved today, so I think I'm safe. But I think this cat is messed up. He has a girly name, and can willows be red? And...ginger brown cat? *dies* -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 22:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Again, when I state 35, I mean 35. That doesn't mean put up another when images are in CBA or if they're being declined, or if your image is very close to being approved. It means put it up when there's room. Now, the image is well done. The only thing I see is that the spots look too regular and poka-dotted. Make them a few different sizes and more irregular, and blur. -- Bram ble  22:44, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm really sorry, Bramble! I promise it won't happen again. And thanks. :) -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 23:24, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add brown patches, and maybe make the mottled more like his warrior image. → •Maple  fern•  ←  10:56, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 12:12, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, Icy this is good! An I mean good! As Bramble said the spots look more like polka dots. Make them like spots. Mist cloud  21:00, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

I would just say Darken shading, and this will be VERY ready. -- Nighty You know what... I like pie. XD 21:05, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading made the dark spots a reddish colour...should I keep it that way, or lighten it? Btw, the shading was in the front so the highlight was on her back. Than,ks for the nice comments! :D -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:16, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink blends just a tad too much, make it brighter.-- Dark hallows 21:13, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Brightened ear pink, better? -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 21:26, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:30, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It wouldn't blur more. -- Icestorm Peace 23:39, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

The patches don't really look like his warrior image -. → •Maple  fern•  ←  23:46, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maple's right, it doesn't. it's too bright, and there's to dramatic a change between colours. Butterfly } { Song!  16:17, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Um....I copied the colours from his warrior image....-- Icestorm Peace 16:24, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's the way you did the shading and highlights. I suggest redoing it because the mottles look more like spots and are too big. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:45, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Icestorm Peace 23:17, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the image more. It looks a bit yellow right now.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:52, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. - Icestorm Peace 01:18, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a bit. River pelt  00:27, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

There is no highlights...-- Icestorm Peace 00:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Just make the eye lighter like his warrior image, and this will be good to go :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:27, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Icestorm Peace 20:30, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit lighter  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:32, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Done. -- Icestorm Peace 20:34, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ice ths should be on your current projects. Imagewise darken the back shading a tiny bit. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:39, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made it look worse..-- Icestorm Peace 20:59, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think it'll look fine if you blur it a bit more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:04, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

It can't blur anymore. -- Icestorm Peace 21:10, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

I was able ti blur it more. Would you like me to upload that version? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:19, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, please. Pixlr is really stupid now...-- Icestorm Peace 21:21, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

I reuploaded it for you. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:30, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, Ash. :)-- Icestorm Peace 21:37, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:23, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (W) - For Approval
I'm withdrawing Rosetail, so this should be ok. Comments? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 20:07, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have torn ears?  Snickers  20:10, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

His other images don't have torn ears, and I don't want to contradict. It'll probably be fixed next tweak week. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 20:13, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and stripes, and darken the ear pink a tad. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:16, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! '''20:28, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

There are some stray pixels around his tail.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:11, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ''' <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 00:24, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

His tail looks odd... the break point doesn't seem right... perhaps thicken it?-- Dark hallows 21:11, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 23:42, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks unnatural. Maybe make the tip bend down a little, you know, sag? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   00:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 01:06, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better, but the part circled here-looks more sagged than broken. Can you fix that? I'm sorry I didn't give enough detail before. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:30, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 14:36, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

just lighten the pink a tinsy bit it looks brown &lt;fontcolor="Black"&gt;LionClaw&lt;/font&gt;<font color="Yellow" style="background:red;"> Lionclan's coming!

Reuploaded. Better? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 15:10, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur some more (Love your siggie :)) Quailflight  09:42, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? (thanks!) <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 23:35, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 18:12, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:02, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön''' <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 10:55, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Moss (Q) - For Approval


you like? i do i think its my best yet....constructmentsLionClaw132 03:50, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. Lighten that and make the ear pink smaller. Also darken the shading on the face-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:01, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where did the image go?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I put it back up. I think this is the right image? Dark hallows 16:03, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

yes thank you! my computer is bieng very very STUIPID it wont let me downlaod it! any ways comments?LionClaw132 00:00, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred the lineart on the back. S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 20:28, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Also rename the file to Moss.queen.png S n icker s      Life's a rollercoaster 20:29, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

btw i didnt blur the line art the queen image came like that so it cant be helped but i can fix the file LionClaw132 23:37, May 7, 2010 (UTC)&nbs o i nClaw L     Times running out

Lighten the shading. -- Icestorm Peace 19:41, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

And also thicken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:26, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (W) - For Approval
Comments? Did I make him too red? I copied the deputy image.-- Quailflight 04:02, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! The eye line art is a little blurred. Make him more orangey. Darken the tail and arm stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:12, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I redid the image. Comments?-- Quailflight 09:06, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too dark, and blur the shading. 雨 晶須  14:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. That's as far as the blurring will go.-- Quailflight 21:55, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''I want to reupload it but it won't load! Can is it a glich or something?'''-- Quailflight 08:39, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Try uploading it again. _  Ice  thr  oat   ^  Only one more month of school! 20:20, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED.-- Quailflight 06:14, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Quailflight 05:27, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Just sharpen the stripes a bit more and make the ear pink a bit brighter. River pelt  00:18, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I really need some help with the blurring and the earpink. Can someone help me? -- Quailflight 11:07, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, all u have to do for the ear pink is make it a color brighter than the color of the cats fur (but not too bright), and make it into a triangular form. The blurring comes out better when you use a smaller brush (like a 5px brush) and make sure that the blurring makes the image smoother looking, if its blurred too much, the image will look bad. If it ever looks too blurred, you can use the shapen tool. River pelt  23:33, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is good. Blur the top of his head some more (not the line art though!!) and lighten up his earpink. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 03:44, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Umm....Guys, I don't want to be rude, but this is my 5th or 6th charart, I've been here since December so I know what to do. (This is Quailflight, too lazy to log in) 11:08, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED.-- Quailflight 11:19, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the bright spot on his head, lighten the tail and darken the stripes, I can't see any right now-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having so much trouble. Would anyone like to help me? Quailflight 11:14, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sure! What do you need help with? 雨 晶須  23:43, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

What Nightshine said :) Quailflight  09:19, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Adderfang (D) - For Approval
Hey, guys! Sorry for not contributing to the project lately. =P Our computer broke down a couple months ago, and I've been using my mom's laptop ever since. I thought Pixlr wouldn't really work well on her computer, but I think Adderfang turned out alright. What do you guys think? Oh, and also, I drastically changed his deputy image from his warrior image because I was planning to re-do his warrior image during the next tweak week. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:43, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I'm not sure you can totally re-do another person's image, even for Tweak Week. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:45, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Could someone remind me when he was deputy? I don't remember that; but I guess I could have overlooked it in BP  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

He wasn't. Sunstar's only deputies were Tawnyspots and Bluefur, and Bluestar's deputy was Redtail up until his death. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 01:03, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Huh; where did we get that he was a deputy I wonder? Oh well. Sorry, Honeyfur; is there another cat you can use this as?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:46, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

He was temporary deputy for a while. Kinda like you Night. He filled in while Tawnyspots was sick. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:49, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I was the one who did Adderfang's warrior image, so that was why I was planning to re-do him. Also, when Tawnyspots was sick, Adderfang filled in for him, so he was a temporary deputy. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 10:57, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the chest area. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? And also, I'm really sorry for causing all this confusion; if Adderfang doesn't work out, I could always choose a different cat. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. This is really good!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:17, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Snowflight! I actually re-located the highlight. Is it blurred enough? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:44, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great to me. -- Sandy star 21:28, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bram ble  10:27, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes and earpink could be blurred more. Quailflight 05:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights can be blured a little more too.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:56, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blur tool is kind of weak, but I tried to make it work. How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:04, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Voletooth (A)--For Approval


Revised Again! Any comments?Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is my 1st charart and I went off of the tutorial pages. Can you help me make this better? Hawkfur7 04:45, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the paint and blur messed up the lineart and I don't know how to fix it. Suggestions?Hawkfur7 04:57, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Layer over another line art. This is really good for your first charart! The eye colour needs to be fixed-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:00, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Adding to that, the image is a little too red. Copy the colour from his elder image and use that-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:06, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the eyes a lighter shade of green? Is that what you meant? Because I based his eyes off of his warrior picture.Hawkfur7 05:16, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

If I'm making him his elder color, do you want me to make the stripes a darker brown or keep them as is?Hawkfur7 05:25, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Use all the colours from his elder image. For the way the eye should look go here and look under the eye section-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:23, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a more natural color. Sil ver paw Chase that mouse!  19:03, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Not bad for a first image :) First thing first, the eyes don't have their line art anymore and most of our images keep their lineart of the eyes. When you re-add the lineart like Nightshine said, you should good to go with that. Make the ear pink the same color as his warrior and elder image. His colors look closer to his warrior image so it seems fine, but of course those don't technically match the color of his elder image as they're lighter. Then there's the highlights on his tail, just burn those a little as they're too bright against the rest of his fur.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:04, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * How about now?Hawkfur7 04:10, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg. Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg. Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Converting might not help...and I just noticed that you named the file wrong too. Change it too Voletooth.apprentice.png if I'm correct I believe--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:37, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, the weird thing is, I did save it as a png file, not a jpg. But, I resaved and renamed as a png file, just to be sure. It should be fine now.Hawkfur7 05:41, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * I also made him more of his elder colors, but lighter. And I fixed the lineart on his body and on his eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 05:49, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

He stills looks .jpg...I'm afraid even I have never found a way to undo this. However, I got the reverted version here:

Now I suggest just redoing him with this one, that way you won't have to start from scratch--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:53, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

How do you layer over another line art? Because I'm using Pixlr, and everytime I add a layer, it just deletes the one I was working on.Hawkfur7 06:11, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. I figured it out how to layer over another lineart using GIMP2.Hawkfur7 19:40, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I reuploaded the modified png image you posted, and it's at the top. Better?Hawkfur7 02:16, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hello...? :(Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anyone there?...Hawkfur7 09:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. Blur the ear pink just slightly more, but other than that it looks great! : Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:10, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''At the top. I blurred the ear pink more. Is it good to go?Hawkfur7 21:50, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to ask Bramble, but it looks good to me! Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:55, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye and add stripes to the tail. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:00, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''at the very top. I added stripes to the tail and fixed the eyes a little. How is it now?Hawkfur7 02:09, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. at the very top. I also brightened/darkened him with the burn/dodge tool, just to give him a little more depth.Hawkfur7 05:32, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try using This to see a way to do eyes. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:16, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 06:51, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Husker (KP) - For Approval
There are six discussions, so this is technically under the limit. Constructments? -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 19:53, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the grey on top of the head just a little more.Hawkfur7 05:44, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 19:27, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the top of his tail a tad bit more then I think it will be ready for approval. Its very very good Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 03:48, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks:) Blurred tail shading. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ          ö        19:30, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W)-For Approval
Well, this is my first charart, and I think it came out pretty well. Any comments? River pelt  23:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

That is REALLY GOOD! Try to make his bottom jaw look... strange. Almost like broken, okay? That's how it's supposed to be! But seriously, it looks nice. Shadowstream 11:22, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made the jaw look as crooked as i could. Riverpelt 18:04, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The line art is really blurred. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:54, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The jaw needs to look like. And the lineart is really blurred. -- 雨 晶須  22:18, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! '''Reuploaded. '''How's that, or do I need to sharpen the line art a bit more? River pelt  22:29, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes you should. And try expanding the beige on his nect more, and also add sharper edges to the tabby stripes.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  02:24, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

That is awesome! Jut sharpen the tabby a little like Mousetalon said. And try to make his fur an almost red color, like the leader charart. Shadowstream 12:07, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I tried to sharpen the line art more, fixed the beige on his neck, sharpened the tabby markings, and made his fur a red color. Hold on I have to blur the tabby marks more.'''Reuploaded. '''How's this? River pelt  12:54, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

....The whole image looks blurred likes he's just super FUZZY.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:58, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry! I'll redo it completely! River pelt  23:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid the entire charart! Is this any better? River pelt  00:10, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

The pink still isn't hitting it....and you have bits and pieces of gray surrounding the image. They possibly came from editing the image and unable to see it as the image is transparent. I uploaded an image to show, but this image isn't transparent so don't try editing it. Just use it as a reference. I also included the ear pink from his deputy image.
 * Much better...now lets begin. The ear pink needs to lighter as its too dark/bright and it doesn't match his deputy image one as you can see above. He's also missing a patch of tan fur on his front forepaw. The tabby stripes need to be blurred tremindously.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:00, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks Shimmerpool! Reuploaded. Oops I need to blur the stripes a bit more. Reuploaded. How's this? River  pelt  11:49, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded. I cleared out the gray spots and made the ear pink the same color as the deputy's ear pink. River pelt  23:07, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, fix the line art on the muzzle, blur the stripes more and lengthen the cream coloured throat-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:51, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... '''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the line art, blurred the stripes, and lengthened the cream-colored throat. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:37, May 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blur the stripes in more. You see how they're supper smoothed in almost like fadded into hsi fur on the deputy image? Also I think some highlights would be nice. Just add them to the same place as his deputy image. :)--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:53, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded.  Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:44, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - For Approval
There are 6 discussions, so I dont think this is over the limit. Comments? Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 00:37, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really good Blacktail! Just make the ear pink color more visable. River pelt 00:43, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, River! Reuploaded. Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 00:47, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I added you to the current projects table, Blacktail, as Warriors808. You can add in your current projects there now; you're near the bottom of the table. Just use CTRL + F to find yourself if need be. On the image, nice job, but the ear pink needs to be a hotter and more visible pink; try a little darker and less dull. Also add a white pixel to the eye to give it some life. Bram ble  10:44, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow...This is better than mine. Quailflight 05:29, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:26, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, and don't forget the white pixel. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:57, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) -- for Approval


Hi This Is My Import for Rainfur of SkyClan as a loner. I know it's small, I'll make it bigger soon!Thanks! Sunspirit

Next time, Sunsp

irit, start a new section. I'll wait for the one to come up before commenting. → •Maple  fern•  ←  10:39, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I'm New so I dont Know That Much! :( Sunspirit 21:48, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry. No one is mad at you. Everyone makes mistakes when they're new. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:52, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it. Fix the blurred part by the back ankle.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:23, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Erase some of the markings outside the line art. River pelt  00:22, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay.. Is That Better? ( This Is My First :) ever one) Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 05:23, May 16,

2010 (UTC)

You still need to erase some of the blurred gray areas around his body

. Here's a tip, you can't usually see the mistakes in pixlr but before you swap the new image with the original, you can see some of the gray areas around the image. I circled the areas that need to be erased in the light blue color for you if you need help.(sorry about it being in Thumbnail form, it wouldn't go into regular form for me) River  pelt  23:22, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, add shading to the muzzle and head, make the ear pink smaller, fix the blurred pupil, and do what Riverpelt said. -- Icestorm Peace 00:24, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Is This Better? I Erased and Made the pink in the ear smaller. Comments? Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 00:45, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
There are a lot of discussions, and this is section 36, so this should be under the limit, but if it's over then please let me know. Image-wise, this is by far fail. I know that the stripes are way too dark, but when I lighten them you can't see them. Comments and suggestions? 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 02:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, just blur the tabby stripes a little more. =) Poppystorm Flight of an Eagle 18:00, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 6   Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 23:39, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good! Darken the paw and head shading a tiny bit, and blur the ear pink on the left a bit. -- Icestorm Peace 00:22, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Our left, or the left ear? 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 22:24, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (Ki) ~ For Approval


Sorry again for my terrible activity level, but I decided to look for a kitty to do. ^-^ I'm in a pretty good mood right now (I acted as a mother to a litter of pups, and learned that one of them ended up being my neighbor's dog!!! *squeals*), so sorry if I'm over the page limit, but here's pebblefoot as a kit. Comments?  GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 15:59, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is really nice! Blur on the top of the head Quailflight  12:27, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

That's awsome news, Mumble! It's great to see you again :D As for the image; I don't see anything else wrong apart from what Quailflight said.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:43, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

^-^ On it!  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 19:50, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) -- For Approval
This probably isn't my best charar ever, but anyway, comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  22:51, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good. ^-^ I'd say to darken the shading and lighten the highlights because I can't really see them, but this is trully fabulous. ;)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 21:44, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading and lightened highlights, better?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:23, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. :)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 23:18, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the bit of shading on the tail tip and also blur the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:49, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ear pink and tail tip shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:30, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnpelt Alternate (W)- For Approval
I went with a brownish cream color. Comments? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good! Just thicken and darken the chest and head shading. -- Icestorm Peace 01:54, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:05, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading and earpink. Thanks Ice. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:09, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more pink-ish. Lighten the chest shading a tiny bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:48, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice :) Brighten the image some though, she looks pale brown rather than cream colored  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:27, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten up the ear and lighten the blurring just a tiny bit. -FrostHeart 02:02, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, I think you mean "brighten up the ear pink and lighten the shading". Correct me if I'm wrong :3  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:11, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yay, my charart is being replaced!!!!!! Bur the neck shading.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  03:24, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Lightened the shading and blurred the neck shading. I couldnt change the earpink because it blended into the pelt and would have to be a dark pink which looked strange. When I lightened the pelt it looked really bright or didnt change much. Comments? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:03, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Splash(KP)- For Approval
, not much to say. Dark hallows 06:06, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Maybe fix his ear pink- more of it. But fantastic! Shadowstream 20:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great, Shady! Just darken the shading a touch. -- Icestorm Peace 00:20, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the colour doesn't go out of the line art-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:38, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done.-- Dark hallows 23:39, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

I still see some colour going out of the line art. Layer over another one a erase the straying pixels. Other than that I see nothing else-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:00, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Mind telling me where? I thought I had erased it all... I fogot to lock the transparent pixels Dx. Dark hallows 01:04, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Whitepaw
2nd charart of mine. Whitepaw. Comments :]

Frostheart, this is your second. You can only have one charart each time. So Whitepaw or Mousepaw? <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 22:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Skywish. May I delete this post then repost it as soon as Mousepaw is archived? FrostHeart 23:30, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

No, please don't delete your posts. Wait for a senior warrior to archive it. Which Whitepaw is this anyway?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:46, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. I didn't mean to sound mean. But I think this is pretty good. Just next time remember to put it on full-size image and save it in PNG form <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 00:17, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Though, it dosen't look like you coloured in his hind legs. Also blur the shading. Its very good! Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 01:13, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Mousepaw was declined and archived, so this can stay up. But I thought that Blackclaw had this reserved?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:23, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I didn't know. I'm not sure. I saw this on this page with the list of cats that needed to be done. Sorry I'm new, i didn't know like how to reserve and stuff. FrostHeart 01:50, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

No, Night (is it ok if i call you that?), I gave Whitetail to Zoe27 because Clovertail was taking a long time to get approved. I let Zoe27 take Whitetail because she really wanted to do her, so I figured it was only fair I did that. 雨 晶須  23:00, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

That was really sweet of you! Alright Frostheart, sorry about this. If you can find another character to use this as; you may keep this up. ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:09, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

lol sweet isn't exactly how I would describe myself... I can't find any other white cats for you to do, but if you darken it some, it could become Minnowtail's alternate apprentice image (is that reserved yet?) 雨  晶須  01:58, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, there's no color on the legs farthest from us. Quailflight 09:33, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy(W) For Approval
Ok. I think this is below 35. Someone tell me if it's not...So constructments? <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 22:37, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! The colours don't look correct though. Darken the whole thing a bit and thicken the tail stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:45, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Done. Anything else? <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 00:14, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. -- Icestorm Peace 00:30, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten and define the ear just a bit more. FrostHeart 02:01, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Webfoot (W) - For Approval
I just withdrew Boulder, so this should be fine. How is it?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:44, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good! Just darken the haunch and muzzle shading. Blur the ear pink some. -- Icestorm Peace 00:28, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good! Just make the ear more pink. Darken the haunch just a tiny bit more. -FrostHeart 02:00, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is acually the same color as his elder image; I don't really think it should be changed. And I think the haunch looks fine, but that's just me.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:09, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I darkened the haunch shading a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:05, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reserving
Um..on the "reserve" list or something, I don't see my name. I'd also like to reserve Goldenflower as an apprentice. Am I allowed to do that if I don't have Whitepaw archived yet? Sorry, I'm new. :] FrostHeart 01:57, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine :) Okay, I've added your name to the current project list. Just put the character you want to do on that list, along with the rank and date. However, Blacktail already has Goldenflower's apprentice image up for approval on the page. And you can only have one image up for approval on this page.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:08, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Grading
Mousefur's talk page says that her charart status is graded "planned", but she has all the chararts she needs. Shouldn't it be higher?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:21, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Must've missed that one. It's fixed. In the future, feel free to fix a grade that doesn't make sense; if the article has a charart, it should have a silver paw print in the grade box. Bram ble  22:21, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Well, what about gold? Do we have to nominate them for gold? Lionblaze is the only article I know of with a gold status in Charart.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:35, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

As far as I am aware, the article must have been a featured article for reasons other than content drive and have it's chararts done (obviously). I wasn't aware it was a nominated grade for PCA as such, just filled in once they meet the requirements for PC. There may, however, be some characters who have been featured for PC and now have all their chararts so maybe this needs a review as I'm pretty sure there are other characters that fit the PCA requirements even if their article is not completely up to scratch... or do we need to put PCA in with PC on this? (yes I just went in a big circle... it's early for me, which is my excuse) -- Sandy star 05:19, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Russetfur (W) ~*~ For Approval
I've been really wanting to do her for quiet a while! Any comments? Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 03:35, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that somebody already has her reseved  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:56, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shimmerpool reserved her. This is the 7th time you've done this. Dawnleaf, you have to look on the reservation page. use ctrl and f. Type in the name of the charart you would like to do, and see if it's available to do. If it shows a result, it's taken. Please look at it closely. This will be declined by a senior warrior sometime later. Quailflight 11:20, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Actually Dawnleaf can do this. Shimmerpool has Darkstripe (W) reserved. Make the chest hghlight a bit bigger and darken the shading a tad. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:50, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: Darkedned the shading, and make the chest highlight bigger. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 23:26, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Technically I did have her reserved but the new rule came so, yes, Dawnleaf is able to do this image.-<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:30, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the hightlights and blur the shading quite a bit.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:36, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: Honesty, I think she looked better before...comments? Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 01:47, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

No this is a senior warrior quality. However, I don't see any shading on the front legs. Quailflight 09:35, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Gorseclaw (Ki) - For Approval


Gorseclaw as a kitten. Constructments? Bram ble  22:40, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great, Bramble! Just blur the paw shading and tail shading a tad more. -- Icestorm Peace 22:51, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lengthen the stripes on the cheeks a bit more.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:59, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Acorntail (D) For Approval
I tried Sandy but it was hard... Comments? <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 01:32, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be darker, I can't really see the eye color, and the pelt should be darker. Otherwise, he looks great! Nice tabby stripes! 雨 晶須  01:40, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Bracken, Bluestar, and Insaneular
I don't want to remove them from the project; but all three have stated that they quit PCA. Should we remove them from the list? But, Bluestar did say she would probably continue commenting on images. So should we remove them or not?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:26, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think so. If they decide to rejoin we could always re add them and they'll still be able to comment on images. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:39, May 19, 2010 (UTC) Well insane said on her user page she might come back but it's not guaranteed --<font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 21:06, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Insane has also been coming back commenting recently so her membership is still undecided it seems.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:08, May 19, 2010 (UTC)