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Furled Bracken (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Comments? 17:09, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and blur the stripes a little more. They look softer on his other images. 17:48, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:00, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there are more stripes on the ancient and sharpclaw. Also, smooth the shading some more everywhere. 18:52, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Okay, I added a tail stripe and a haunch stripe, but if this needs more stripes still then I'll add more. :P 19:18, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I really think you should add stripes at least to the tail. There are 13 stripes (I think I counted right) on the tails of both of the other images, whereas this only has eight, which is significantly less. 20:14, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes look blotchy, and the shading, I can't tell the difference. Did ya smooth it? 21:35, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Well, I sure did try! :) 21:47, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The face stripes don't appear to match the other images

Reuploaded I'm going off of the ancient image. 22:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say that the sharpclaw image is first in the set. 22:54, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah. You gotta match both of 'em Shy. Also, well done on the approved images of yours. I'm genuinely proud of you on your progress. 22:56, 6/06/2017

Perhaps you could give some shape to the haunch shading? Also, the shading seems to be leaking in some places. 18:40, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you so much, Broken! 19:38, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add more stripes to his --> leg or haunch thing? And his like shoulder chest area? It has more on his other images Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded 21:08, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the line art in a few places all around the image.

Can you please redline them? 01:42, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I mean, it's sorta,,, everywhere

Reuploaded 17:56, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the hard-edged lines in the earpink, and smooth out all the shading all over the image, it doesn't look different then the other uploads where I've told you to smooth it out 19:33, 6/08/2017

Reuploaded 20:11, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

For the stripes on the tail, especially the part closest to the body, can you make them reach the lineart? Some of them seem to just stop a little before the lineart. For the stripes on the main body, can you make them taper a bit? 16:19, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:20, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the stripes. 18:13, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little and smooth out that bit of shading on the back

Reuploaded 19:34, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the right front leg. 12:48, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:16, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

I still think that the stripes should be tapered a bit. 19:38, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:21, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hard-edged stripe. 01:59, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pupil? I think you put a highlight over a pixel in the pupil, and if the blank has set pupils, you can't change them. (Unless putting a highlight over the pupil is fine, idk, all I know is Snowed said no changing the pupil if it's pre-set

Reuploaded Yikes! 02:27, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes seem to be longer on his other images

Reuploaded 23:11, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere 00:46, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:14, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear sharper/less smudged on his other images.

Reuploaded 20:07, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  04:34, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, but there's color leaking onto the lineart in multiple places, and the shading looks.. I don't know the word for it, blotchy I guess? Smooth it out a little.

Also I believe there'd be more stripes on the --> haunch

Reuploaded 19:09, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Smooth shading near the rear?(No rhyme intended! :P) 21:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad, and define the light on <-- paw. Also, I belive there is leaking shading on --> back paw, and eye color leaking outside the lineart. 21:39, 6/06/2017

Reups Thanks Shypaw! And broken, the front paw you're talking about isn't supposed to have any light on it. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, maybe add some shading to the <--- ear (just a tad) and darken the nose colour? 22:15, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there is any nose color, and if there is, define it a bit 22:33, 6/06/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the front paw farthest from us. Also, lighten the shading a little bit? 22:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused with your shading placement. The shading on the tail, back, and chest/neck area indicate that the light is coming from <--- (from the right/behind the cat) while the legs, haunches, and head indicate that the light is coming from the ---> (from the left/in front of the cat). I believe you're going to have to switch one of these in order for it to make sense. 23:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I switched around the shading. Is it better now? --ErmineGlow (talk) 13:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading around the belly and definitely the face shading need to be swapped now. Also, define the light on the closest hind paw.

Vec said that if I only switched on of the shading parts around, I would be good. I switched around the legs and haunches, so I don't think I need to swap the chest/belly and face shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I made a mistake (mostly because I was super tired when I wrote that, but that's not important); the head shading needs to be swapped (covering more of the <--- face with the light coming from the <---). Don't only just take my word. That's why there are other people here. I'm bound to make mistakes (like I just did). Danny's got a good eye for critiques. As for the belly shading, I personally think it's optional (artist's choice) for this shading perspective. If you're keeping it, I think it should be swapped so it hugs the foreleg instead of the hind leg. Or you could make it just emcompass the lower part of the belly. 23:28, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

The shading's leaking a little bit on the lower chest and the haunch, and I think the earpink might be layered over the lineart in ---> ear? 22:35, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on his back and some in the upper left corner of the image. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 13:34, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and the closest back leg/paw

There's some waste on the back and above the head. 19:04, June 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Opps, I didn't mean leaking, what I meant was waste! Lol. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 19:11, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There is still some shading leaking on the back leg closest to us. 13:00, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:21, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's leaking shading almost everywhere, see here http://vvcap.com/sJTZiQGhuRX 09:38, 6/11/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:37, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define <--- earpink. 18:15, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:49, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Add some light to the back leg furthest from us? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 23:46, June 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * Not light, I mean shading. My bad. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:01, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:32, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the haunch a little bit

Re-ups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:26, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is still leaking on the haunch. 01:33, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

The highlight in the eyes needs to be in the provided hole in the pupil I think

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:10, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste all around the back. 23:22, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:25, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the closest back paw. Not the leg, just the paw

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:46, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten shading a little.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:07, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 20:35, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and the back area above the haunch some^^

Reups Just Re-did the shading because I didn't really like it. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:45, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Defined some of the shadingErmineGlow (talk) 16:52, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest, front leg closest to us, and the haunch. There are also light-colored pixels on the back leg closest to us, which should be removed. http://i.imgur.com/u5QxPBc.png 20:48, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:21, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

This is looking nice so far! Define the shading depth on the closest front leg?

Can you define the tail shading?

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:23, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define > earpink?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  04:35, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the shoulder

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 16:32, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Blossom (W) - For Approval
I'm pretty sure putting this up again is allowed, did what was said after the last reupload before this was declined because of lack of work. 13:53, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the neck shading

Maybe also curve the neck shading at an angle or something. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:56, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think if Branch smooths it, Cosmo, it might fix the issue without having to alter it any further. I've had the same problem countless times before and smoothing usually fixes it.

so i think to match her other images better you should try and recreate that "smudgey" affect as opposed to the blurry look they have now. in my personal experience, it will save you a lot of hassle if you redid the patches with the style of the other images in mind and smudge them towards the flow of the body with a hard edged 1px brush (i think thats what the OAs of the other images did?). ofc if you dont wanna redo the patches thats perfectly fine, it's just i think it will be more convenient to do so since it unfortunately, as much as it'd look nice as a stand alone image, doesnt really match the other present images rn   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:13, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smoothing it didn't really make much of a difference, so I just angled it a little bit like Cosmo said to do and smoothed it quite a bit. I didn't totally redo the patches, but I smudged them more. 17:50, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the closest front leg shading

Reuploaded 19:59, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Mind smoothing out the neck shading a bit more? Also Re: your comment from before Danny commented. Sometimes smoothing it out does fix the problem, but it appears in this case it didn't. I just know what a pain tweaking shading to curve more can be, so I tried to see if there were other ways to save you what can be quite an annoyance; I've had to do that a lot to my earlier images.

Reuploaded 16:44, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Ok so, I recommend lowering the opacity of the neck shading. Sometimes blurring it over and over or curving it (especially on white cats) doesn't work. In this case I feel like you should lighten it and it might do the problem.

Reuploaded 14:05, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and main body, also on the farthest ear.

Reuploaded 14:43, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Rabbitfur (Star) ~ For Approval
I'll just dump this here and fix up some things. Don't comment on that shoulder patch--I'll fix it up later.

Define the shading depth

the base is darker. There just appears to be a paler chest.

Define the tail shading Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:43, June 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

The stripes are darker too, I believe. 21:26, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

(Just gonna jump in and add that it appear as though you used to pale color as the base, and the base color as the stripes, to clarify.)

I think the elder has texture <span style="">23:00, 6/19/2017

Can someone clarify the texture thing? I looked to see if there was texture, and I didn't see any.

I definitely see texture.

Also, the paws might be pale too, but you probably want a second opinion considering they're under shading on the elder.

re-up Texture = pain in the butt.

There's gray inbetween the tail bend <span style="">00:48, 6/20/2017

Smooth shading depth and the stripes on the head should be thicker. This is really cute, Star. 00:53, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

The chest and muzzle need to be pale. 01:54, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I left the face stripes alone because I'm pretty sure they're the exact same thickness. (thanks Shy)

There's still that grey patch where the tail is wrapped. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 15:31, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps you could lighten the shading on the head? The stripes kind of fade into the shading. 16:56, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

I think the stripes are still a bit lighter than the other images. 17:35, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add a little shading to the <-- ear, seems kinda flat imo. This is nice my dude Star, good job <span style="">03:53, 6/21/2017

Maybe smooth the shading on the base of the tail, or lighten it? Either would be good.

re-up For some reason the stripe layer's opacity was like 60 and I was so confused. XD

Smooth the flank shading a little? <span style="">21:23, 6/21/2017

Define shading on the <-- shoulder, lighten tail base shading. Also, smooth the shading on the bottom of the chest.

re-up 10 layers and counting. ..

Define the --> ear pink, and there appears to be gray leaking onto the <-- ear pink, but that might be intentional

re-up I think the gray you're seeing is the shading.

Zelda (R) ~ CBA
someone send help

Define the shading depth

Re-uploaded

Might just be the tint, but is there any light on the tail? <span style="">05:29, 6/20/2017

yes, but it's hidden by the dorsal stripe. and i also added a highlight there even.

Smoothen out the shading on the tail. 04:51, June 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i tried

Maybe blur the highlight Fox <span style="">06:44, 6/22/2017

Re-uploaded

CBA?

Firestar (Alt. D) ~ CBA
He was shown as solid in the YS manga, which is set in Rising Storm, and Firestar is deputy at that time. All colors from alt apprentice, which got all it's colors from the alt leader. Comments? 17:38, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's some leakage on -> ear. Good job! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 17:40, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 17:42, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth on the legs. 17:56, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:17, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 19:27, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:19, June 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paw closest to us prehaps <span style="">21:15, 6/19/2017

Reuploaded. 01:07, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink 16:54, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:58, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Wolfstep (Ki) - For Approval
The stripes may look intimidating on the other images, but on this blank, they aren't literally the worst thing ever. Nice.

I don't think the white on the tail on the other images are that smudged. Cute kitty!

reups Wolfstep will always be the cutest kitty :^>

Is there texture on this? I think there is texture on his other images. It just doesn't look like it here. But he's so cute! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:34, June 20, 2017 (UTC)

He looks tinted purple to me, or maybe that's just my screen <span style="">05:53, 6/20/2017

reups There's texture, and I knew that, I just rushed and forgot it :P. + He was like, just a tiny bit purple, so I made it solid gray, but imo it wasn't a noticeable change.

reups Tweaked texture

Smooth out the flank shading <span style="">03:46, 6/23/2017

reups I tried, but there's two stripes under the shading that make it appear a lot sharper than it is. I hope this looks a lil bit better though

Mallowfur (E) - For Approval
LOL THIS IS SO BAD PLS DESTROY ME THX 11:21, June 22, 2017 (UTC)

Defibe the shading Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, June 22, 2017 (UTC)chat\

Nah this is pretty. The stripes on the star are a bit softer, so smudge them a little.

I feel like the stripes would be barely visible if they are smudged again. They're pretty soft as is, and the pattern could fade into the shading or fur if they're smudged anymore. <span style="">20:12, 6/22/2017

They need to be softer.

To me they seem soft as is, but I noticed the stripes are slightly darker-as per this http://vvcap.com/417u8wezFd2 And the earpink could match a small bit better. <span style="">20:18, 6/22/2017

The stripes are fine as they are, smudge-wise. They match well enough and they're not all that smudged on the Star and were never meant to be.

reup lol thanks star XD 17:46, June 24, 2017 (UTC)

Mistmouse (Star) ~ For Approval
Hope I got the stripes right. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:47, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Smoothed out shoulder shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:49, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define ear pink

'''Re-uploaded. '''I color-picked it from both the warrior and queen, and this was the same color. so I put it above a tiny bit of shading layers and made the other one more visible. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 05:09, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pupil jn the far eye? Rainbowmistake (talk) 23:37, June 23, 2017 (UTC)chat

The tail stripes are thinner and there seems to be more on other images. 23:53, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:49, June 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reedpaw (HJ) (Ki) ~ For Approval
when you can't even copy your own pattern lmoa 00:02, June 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth just a tiiiiny bit (also, me too at the 'lmoa')

It seems dark enough to me. <span style="">04:52, 6/24/2017

I can see the shading, I said shading depth.

I am aware =/ I thought that if the shading was dark enough, you didn't have to define the depth <span style="">05:08, 6/24/2017

The depth is more to do with the darkness of the shading and a gradient going from the lineart or a farther area. Even if the shading is dark, there has to be a variation. :) 05:26, June 24, 2017 (UTC)

is the dark black spot on her tail a stripe or shading? (lmao I accidently put 'his' instead of 'her')

of course it could be my terrible eyes, but from what i see i think the shading depth is actually pretty adequate considering the darkness of the shading and the pattern (generally as long as the shading is very dark, which is definitely appropriate for this pattern, shading depth isnt really visible and it only has real emphasis and importance in lighter variants of shading)  18:04, June 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on both of the front legs a bit Rainbowmistake (talk) 19:36, June 24, 2017 (UTC)chat

Kinktail (Alt. Ki) ~ For Approval
So I wanted a bit of a challenge, and I got it with the tail. :P This is my second full set, after Curlypaw. I matched the tail pretty well I think and I'm happy with it. 20:06, June 24, 2017 (UTC)

If her tail got crushed when she was a kit, wouldn't she get a regular kit image with a normal tail, and then an alt with a crushed tail (this)? 20:09, June 24, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, this should be the alt.

Ok... So what all would I have to change? The file name (which will actually have to be changed by an admin), reservation name, this title, and yeah. How would I make the regular kit if I were to do that next? I can't really reverse and go back and make the tail normal again, overlaying the lineart, or at least I don't know how to on this app. 20:22, June 24, 2017 (UTC)