Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

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Foxheart (Alt.D)-For approval
hope you like it (First Real Chartart) Rainear 03:39, June 29, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

Sorry, this will have to be declined, Shimmerpool had him reserved first.  Dawny  03:45, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

No that that users is "Alternative Warrior" mine is "Alternative Deputy" Rainear 03:49, June 29, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

Opps sorry.  Dawny  04:14, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I took him out of thumb nail for you. You should always upload it full size. As for the image, the lineart looks very strange, and it's way too big. What art program do you use? Second, It's not the same color as the deputy image Foxheart already has. This is yellow as apposed to ginger. Third, there's no shading at all Night  Fall 06:15, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks very strange...I would say to layer a deputy image on it. Add shading. The pelt color should be the same as his warrior image. Make the ear pink smaller and darker. Icefall★ Talk 14:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks as if you traced it. Did you? Icefall★ Talk 15:03, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it shows up waaaaaaaaaaaay to big. Like you saved it about three times the normal size of the file. And, it does look like you traced the lineart. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   15:15, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Also, rename it Foxheart.deputy.alt.png Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   18:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Here:use this and color it in. 雨晶須 五六七☯☮ 02:46, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I used My Paint if you want to know :) -Rainear 19:04, June 30, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

You should use GIMP or Pixlr to do chararts. This is too big. Use this blank:--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine is right. Use one of those programs, and save that blank to your computer. ☽Ice storm★  19:19, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please use GIMP or Pixlr to add shading. Layer over the line art I gave you onto your image--  Night s h i n e    ~  20:27, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I Dont have Gimp or Pixlr all I have that works with the template is Paint. Rainear Med-cat of Riverclan

Okay, first, this needs to be bigger. Right-click the image Nightshine gave you, press, 'open into new tab' and then save that blank. Go to pixlr.com, and open the image. Then, you should probably re-do it/layer the lineart over this image. Then, darken the shading, blur it, make the ear pink smaller, darken it, and blur it. Also addd shading to the front of the haunch, tail, and face. ☽Ice storm★  21:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Also, use a tutorial for the eyes. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   23:37, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Rainear, you don't have to start a new section when you are redoing it. Instead use the old section you put up, then put the image there. 雨晶須 五六七☯☮ 14:41, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I've merged the two sections. Please continue to edit from here. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  21:11, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I haven't read Bluestar's Prophecy at all but, how is Foxheart described in the alternate version? (Time for a trip to the bookstore xD) Quailflight  05:17, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

lol, yes. In the allegiances of Bluestar's Prophecy, she is mistakenly described as a tom. And, in Battles of the Clans, there is a chapter where Foxheart is a tom throughout the entire thing. But I'm pretty sure she's supposed to be a she-cat, especially after reading Secrets of the Clans. The Clan suspected Foxheart as being the secret mother of Brokentail, so you know xD Night  Fall 05:19, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-How is it now? Rainear  be as silent as rain

Add shading. Ashshadow Ag 03:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Added shading Rainear   be as silent as rain

Blur the shading and there is color outside of the line art. Ashshadow Ag 03:23, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blured shading (Hope it's better XD) Rainear   be as silent as rain

Not bad for a beginner, but lets get to business. It can be a tad hard shading when your image has a transparent background so you probably see some gray smudges around him. That came from your work of burning my dear friend. Plus it looks like you ran over his eyes with the burn tool as well with changed his eye color. The coloring is kind of darked than Foxheart's original image so try dodging it or desaturating it some. Which ever you prefer :) Once thats done then you can blur in the shading as it looks a little choppy to me, but that might be my computer.--  Gladiator  Band Geek  05:03, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blured Shading even more to make natral fixed eye and It's not darker than the origanal Charart Rainear   be as silent as rain

Is it better or worse? Rainear  be as silent as rain

Reloaded-I know no one mentioned but I looked at the Foxheart page and his eye color is light green so I change the Charart's eye color. Comments? Rainear  be as silent as rain

It has been a day and a half and no one else has commented is it ready to be acepted? Rainear  be as silent as rain

You should wait at least five days, if not a week for asking for comments. As for the image, blur the earpink. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  02:47, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Also, the line art on the jaw looks a bit odd, as if some of it is missing. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  02:48, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-I fixed jaw lineart and I blured/redone the ear pink. Comments? Rainear  be as silent as rain

Oh! I added some shading/highlights on his face. Any Comments/suggestions? Rainear  be as silent as rain

This has an unusual texture that I don't normally see, and it's very pretty. You did a nice job. =) There are a couple of things though; the front foreleg's shading's transition is too hard; blur it and add some more shading down the leg. Add darker shading to the hind paws, as those would be in shadow. Add a little more shading down the tail and blur the existing shading slightly. Off image critique now; I moved the image to the top of the section; please keep it there so it's in a consistent spot. Also, you seem to be only typing three tildes instead of four; please type four so the timestamp will be there as well as the signature. -- 12:19, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-I did what you said bramble and sorry about the tail I did what you asked but I think I blured the transaction too much Rainear   be as silent as rain  15:31, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anything else that needs to be done? 21:02, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

You should wait a few days before asking if anything needs to be done, but I see that there is blurred lineart by his left ear, and on his left leg and haunch, but if it's shading I'm seeing instead then you should blur it. Tiger X Amber We see Heart to Heart 12:20, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Thanks Riverpelt fixed the ear, leg, and shading :) Better?

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading a bit. The chest line art looks a bit funny, overlap it with another of the long haired deputy blanks and it should be good. The line art also looks strange around the front of his haunch-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:22, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Darkened the ear pink and tried to darken shading and fixed the Line art

Thicken the shading on the haunch and blur all of it. 13:33, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Did what you said Ashshadow :) . Better?

The red part indicates that the shading is blurred and theres also some color mixed up. The blue indicates color outside the line art and the line-art color is changed. Lol..it's kinda messy xD I don't have a good stable hand. 17:51, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's coming along nicely. Darken the shading a tad. 17:48, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Tried to fix it hope it's better XD

Blur the shading. River pelt Deputy of StormClan 23:46, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I reverted it to one of its original forms as the shading is lovely right as it is shown now - it doesn't need to be changed further. Saturate and brighten the ear pink to have it stand out a touch more, but don't make the transition hard, and I'd call this good. -- 02:55, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

You took the words right out of my mouth, Bramble! (Seriously, I said the same things, clicked save and it gave me the edit conflict thing) Anyways, I think you should make the eye a bit brighter. It looks really pale. 03:19, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The tail color where it's not shaded looks...brighter than the rest of him. I'm not good with pixlr or gimp or whatever, but maybe blurring the shading just there would help. Don't mess with it otherwise, Bramble and Dove are right, it looks amazing! 11:57, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art is still blurred and some of the line-art is brown. 19:07, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the entire thing, this is brown-ish compared to Foxheart's other images. 70.64.149.241 05:37, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded- Just got back from camp fixed it up. Except it is not brownish and I took the color from the deputy Image so yeah! Comments?

Rainear, even if you took the colour from the other images the colour will be different because of shading and highlights, and your shading could've made it look that way, too. Even if you took the colour from it that doesn't mean anything. If you compare it to her other images the colour on this is duller. That was me above, by the way. 05:23, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

And almost all of the lineart is blurred. 05:25, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome :) just fix some line art on his ear Dusksong 21:13, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I just wanted to point out that Pixlr is a website, and a very handy one at that.

Zor th Highly   Explosive  01:32, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

None of the line art is blurred Dovesong and Dusksong, I checked and I don't use Pixler or Gimp I use My Paint and I think the coloring is just fine Dovesong

Make the ear-pink noticeable. And the line-art isn't blurred because they fixed it. 02:15, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'll fix the ear pink (could you give me the color example Red-pink Salmon pink) and I checked the saved copy on my computer Frostheart

Well, I guess just a bit more noticeable. xD A bit pinker. 16:37, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's awesome, but try to define the ear-pink a bit more. ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  23:05, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Done (Still not shure) and yes the ear pink is blurred. Comments? Rainear  Let the rain guide you  14:21, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, but try to make the ear-pink blurred, a bit? ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  18:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Blur it a bit. 20:58, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rainear, the lineart is blurred. I've checked a million times and again just now. It's supposed to be hard pixels. And like I said before, this is very dull in comparison to her other images. . . also, please don't call me dovesong. Not only do I just dislike that name, there's another person on here called dovesong now, so yeah. Thanks. 05:57, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Also, the shoulder lineart on the shoulder looks different. And the ear pink is very pale. 06:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art looks fine to me, and make the ear-pink...salmonish? And blur it. 22:37, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the chest and head, and front of the haunch. 03:18, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Guys. I took the image and looked at it in GIMP, the lineart wasn't hard pixels like it's supposed to be. If you took it and put it in GIMP and went close up you would see the lineart isn't pixelly. 04:28, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I see it too, Dovesong. Rainear, look at the line art close up in GIMP and then make it one solid colour. 13:14, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I also see it. Spread the highlights more. 19:20, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ahh, finally! Also, it doesn't matter too much but I'd appreciate it if you'd call me Mosspool, because there's a different person in the project called Dovesong. Thank you! Also, someone to all of you who don't know I'm pretty sure when Rainear says My Paint she means a downloadable program which is pretty much has all the same features as pixlr. 00:18, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, yes. I researched it and it is. 02:02, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-(Sorry it took so long but I was working on my new Wiki XD) and yes it is the same program your talking about but I got it in a Email I got. I spreaded the shading looks like there's no shading at all though, Fixed line art again (Like the 4th time), and sorry Mosspool Rainear   Let the rain guide you  05:22, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. By 'My Paint' I thought you meant 'Paint' and by capitalizing the 'M' I thought it was just a grammar mistake. :P Blur the ear-pink still and make the highlights more noticeable. 01:31, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blurred ear pink and changed/redone shading Rainear   Let the rain guide you  07:13, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a lot and make it more reddish, blur it-- 20:22, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Tame the highlights abit. Sorry if that sounds hypocritical. xD 23:16, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

I would darken it again but when I darken it people say to lighten it, then darken, then lighten, and I'm really tired of shanging it :P. but I will fix the highlights Rainear   Let the rain guide you  23:43, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a little more. The one by the shoulder looks a little funny, but that could just be my monitor. Willow heart  1231  23:49, August 30, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Yes, the shoulder highlight is kinda low. 05:00, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's also a bit too far to our right. And the highlights looks kind of...dusty. 22:47, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the chest shading. 23:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-I redid the hole Image to make it look 10x better so how does it look now? Rainear  Let the rain guide you  03:10, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Blur the ear pink-- 15:24, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Fixed and blurred shading. Comments? Rainear  Let the rain guide you  01:38, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading a bit. Blur the ear pink.-- 01:41, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. I'm VERY picky about ear pinks >.< 02:28, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Fixed shading and ear pink. Comments? Rainear  Let the rain guide you  02:40, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and ear pink more. -- 20:56, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink. (I'M STOPPING IN TO SAY HI :D) Tawny (Talk) 21:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

it's still a bit dull compared to Foxheart's other images. I suggest opening this in whatever program you use and having Foxheart's image open and try to match the colours. 04:33, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading, and darken the haunch shading where the tail begins. 20:05, September 5, 2010 (UTC) 19:59, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blurred, Darkened, and Mosspool that is what I did it's the same color as her deputy Image. Comments? Rainear  Let the rain guide you  16:51, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think he still needs his shading blurred some more, particularly on his head and chest, and his ear pink could be blended a bit, too. But, otherwise, nice job. :) -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:07, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Ok Blur and Blend (Ha, Ha, blur and blend) Rainear   Let the rain guide you  00:32, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Still needs more blurring on the edges, I can help, if you want. Darkhallows... Mew? 16:02, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sure thanks Darkhollows :D Rainear   Let the rain guide you  23:20, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred for you. Darkhallows... Mew? 12:10, September 12, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

Hawkheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Well, here's Hawkheart. I like him about as much as I like Thistleclaw. (I. Am. Not. A. Hawkheart. Fan.) Still, I thought he'd be fun to do. All character art is fun to do! Hawkheart was a bit of a challenge, which made it even more fun. Gotta go see the coverart for The Sign of the Moon (I saw it while I was uploading)! Yay! So, comments? I'm kind of happy with how he turned out. :) Holly  dapple  04:19, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, but we've got to figure out which style we're going to use, yours, or Moonpelt's. Personally, I prefer Moonpelt's, it looks more flecked. But that's just me Night  Fall 04:38, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Nightfall. I know my Hawkheart doesn't look like Moonpelt's. I was thinking about how I was going to do Hawkheart for atleast four days. I really liked his/her style too, but I just can't smudge it in that cool way. I tried, but it looked horrific. I am not joking. I can't make it smudged without messing it up. Holly dapple  04:51, July 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Well if we're using yours, lets blur in the flecks some more please :) I can see a bit of sharp edges in some a little. They are like REALLY sharp, but they're very defined and kind of make it stick out.-- Cchslogo.gif Gladiator  Band Geek Treble_and_bass_clef_heart.png 05:06, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded. All spots blurred with Photoshop Elements, Shimmerpool. Did I get what you meant? I saw it on the throat patch particularly. Man, I'm sleepy. But TW is over, so I can get back to work! Yay! Anyway, if there are any other areas in particular that look weird, let me know, please. Holly  dapple  06:06, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

This looks nice. I have two small suggestions: the ear pink is a little big and is almost falling out of his ear. And the highlight on the shoulder, as well as the spots could do with some more blending. Perhaps try using the smudge tool a little on the spots and then blending. It takes some getting used to but looks good. 12:05, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the earpink, blended the highlight, and smudged and blurred the spots. I kind of like this. :) But I was wondering if since he's supposed to be "flecked", maybe he should look more like Ashfur or Ferncloud? Oh, and before I save this, if I don't respond to any messages right away, that's just because I may not be able to get to the computer (what with the homeschooling, cats, computer, and heat!). But I didn't smudge the paws because two of my cats have shag-rug long fur, and their paws are not smudged. Holly  dapple  05:03, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, maybe he should look more like Ferncloud and Ashfur. Darken the shading around the forearms and haunch a bit more-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:24, August 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * I think that if you add a few smaller flecks to what you already have then it will be fine. 11:05, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded. I added a few smaller flecks...I don't know if I messed it up. I darkened the shading around the forearms and the haunch. Do I need to darken it a touch more? Holly  dapple  21:04, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Add more tail stripes and darken the shading on the forearm and chest-- 23:06, August 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * smacks forehead* I forgot to reupload...ugh, stupid Hollydapple. So technically, now he's reuploaded. I did everything I said above...sorry. Holly  dapple  21:11, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Define and blur the ear-pink more. 20:39, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

He looks great. But can you...maybe add some more shading on the haunch? ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  18:07, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

He looks wonderful! Maybe add some more stripes on his tail? 20:59, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks. I added more haunch shading, more arm shading, and more chest shading, as well as the tail stripes. I didn't understand quite what you meant about the ear pink, Frostheart. What do you mean by defining and blurring the ear pink more? Holly dapple  17:03, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

The ending is a bit rounded, make it more straight to be like a triangle. Other than that, this is fantastic. 00:27, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks, Frostheart! Don't know if I blurred the ear pink too much. If needed, I'll make it more opaque. Holly dapple  21:25, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller. 21:58, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. 22:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I just redid the earpink completely. Holly dapple  21:11, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make it more defined and blur it some more. 22:59, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks like its falling out of the ear, trying moving it further up. -- 03:11, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch a bit. 19:53, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little lighter--make the color more neutral. Maybe add some speckles to his tail? Willow heart  1231  23:52, August 30, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Smudge the chest patches a bit. 23:24, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Also, make the ear pink smaller and darker. And blur it. 17:31, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, darker, and blur it. I agree with Icestorm. I hate Hawkheart, and may StarClan light your path. 02:31, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Try and make the ear pink a bit more triangular Tawny (Talk) 21:56, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it's taken so long. I had the image with the suggested changes at that time ready a few days ago, but Wikia convinently closed off the uploading, and I couldn't get to it for a few days. The ear pink has been lightened, shrunk, and more defined. It looked better lighter than darker, so that's what I did. I may go back and change the ear pink so it's further in the ear, but I'm kinda busy right now. I added a few speckles to his tail, Willowheart. They're kinda small, but...they're speckles. :3 Oh, yeah, and the haunch has been lightened. Holly dapple  04:04, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hold on, for some reason my changes didn't show up. Lemme try again tomorrow. Sorry! Dumb internet. *starts muttering about lousy dialup connection* Holly  dapple  04:59, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on his back. And the tip of his tail is cut off; try and fix that =) 19:32, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rockshade (W)-For Approval
Fail, fail, EPIC FAIL!! I am NEVER doing a black cat again...ha ha they are unlucky. I know the highlights on the shoulder are too noticeable, but if I blur them anymore, then the color goes missing because photoshops blurring is too strong. So...comments? Earth bender Tawny Style! 15:25, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Use a darker color for the highlight then you should use Pixler.com or Gimp although I use nether, I use My Paint but I alway have to remake the background to make it transparent Rainear   be as silent as rain  17:49, August 8,2010

Blur the shading, make the highlights darker. The shading is also lumpy and seems exactly black to me. Make the highlights smaller. Frostheart ♥  17:59, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I fixed the highlights, shading, and I lightened it. Suggestions? Earth bender Tawny Style! 18:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 19:08, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are basically taking over the complete picture now. Just redo the paint, add some shading as you would. Blur, then just midtones in highlights, and click once or twice. Make sure it's not bigger than size 50. Frostheart ♥  19:47, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

He looks dark gray...I suggest making the image darker. Dawnleaf 19:53, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I realized that something changed in the pixlr highlighter, so get rid of the highlights, redo the shading and choose a slightly lighter color for the highlight, choosesize 50 and just pretend thats the highlight. ^^ Frostheart  ♥  22:07, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED:Frostheart, I use photoshop, not pixlr. (I only use it to delete the white part). Anyways, I darkened the image,fixed the highlights. Suggestions? Earth bender Tawny Style! 22:30, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights smaller and make the shading noticeable in the leg area. Frostheart ♥  02:37, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I made the shading a bit more noticable, but I epically FAILED on the making it smaller part. ;P Suggestions? Earth bender Tawny Style! 13:52, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

It's much better now. Just even out the shading on the hind leg. That's it. xD Frostheart  ♥  19:12, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Ifixed the shading on the hind leg. Suggestons? Earth bender Tawny Style! 22:08, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch,otherwise this is great! :) 22:12, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little lopsided. 03:11, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine to me. 13:53, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Same here. And actually, black cats are lucky in Europe, and white cats are bad. 0.o 12:01, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: fixed the hind leg shading. Suggestons? Tawny is here... 22:59, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading.-- 01:28, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Where, specifically? (sorry, but I'm starting to get demented ;P)


 * I'd say to thicken it on the chest and haunch but not the midriff, and to blur it everywhere =) 08:59, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Thickened the shading, but the shading on the haunch won't blur anymore, I'd HIGHLY appreciate it if someone could help me with the blurring, and I also lightened the highlights because I thought they could have used some brightning. Suggestions? Earth bender Tawny Style! 16:11, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I opened this on GIMP and I don't think I blurred it that well. xD I think you darkened the shading too much. 16:23, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Frostheart! Yeah, my shading is now like permenatly black on like all settings, I don't know why. Earth bender Tawny Style! 18:06, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

You should change the opacity, it usually is on 50 you can change it to like 20. :P For Gimp, just adjust the thing at the bottom. :P 18:12, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I took your advice, Frostheart. Fixed the shading and lowered the opacity. Suggestions? Earth bender Tawny Style! 18:39, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm very picky. xD The ear-pink is very blurred.... ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  22:56, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Great :( ... do I have to re-do it, or...un-blur it (is that even possible?) Earth  bender Tawny Style! 00:44, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is what I do :P. I color pick the area nearest to the ear-pink (the highlights,shadows etc) I fill the pink with that. It's okay if it isn't the exact same color. Choose an ear-pink color make a triangle, blah and then blur it. The blurring should even out the pelt color if it wasn't the same. 14:37, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I tried to fix the earpink, but I made it MORE blurred I think....Random Question, but Frostheart, are you an apprentice or warrior for the PCA?

Yeah, I'm an apprentice. Why? :P

I just thought because you give good advice that you'd be a warrior, and you are very helpful!! :D Well when you get your 5th charart approved, I'll definatly be cheering for you!! Anyways, back to charart, any critcism? 00:23, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look a little whispy, are you using a smudge tool? ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:33, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hehe. Thanks. ^.^ 02:54, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

No, I don't use the smudge tool, I use blur...but I've noticed that it's looking sort of...whispyish. I'll fix it ASAP. 15:29, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Just a reminder, school starts on Monday for me, so I'm not going to have that much time. So on Monday, someone is free to take this and continue to work on it, if that's allowed... 15:29, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'll work on it a bit if you'd like, and if it's allowed. :P 17:45, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading.-- 18:10, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: That'd be great, Frostheart! You can start the work immediatly on Monday. And I blurred the shading and highlights as much as I could. 18:22, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. Am I allowed to keep up my Jagged Rock photo and help you work on this? 19:22, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it depends. I might leave Charart for a few months so I could focus on school work, but basically, yes. But I need to talk to Bramble about it... 19:26, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Aww, don't leave. :( 23:00, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

lol if I don't my dad will murder me (it's happened before...) But I won't leave forever! Basically, I would only come on for like the weekends and a month at a time because my main goal is school work. But definatly by December I'll be a full member again.

Just blur the shading more and this should be ready-- 01:17, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. :) Please leave messages on my talk-page to know your alive. :P Just blur the shading a tiny bit, it's great. 02:03, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I tried to blur the shading more, but if I go any harder, my computers gonna blow up at me. And don't worry, I'll stop in every now and then to tell you that I'm alive lol xD Any more Comments? 13:27, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Try blurring the haunch and chest shading a bit more-- 17:33, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I tried to blur the shading as much as I could. Still, theres barely a difference :( Someone else is going to have to try and blur it, because my computer will NOT cooperate when it comes to blurring (first it was too strong, now it's too weak) 01:39, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Comments before approval?-- 20:23, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights and shading really need to be blurred. But hey, isn't Tawny leaving the project? I suppose someone could always just touch it up for her. 17:43, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree with Mossy, but I don't know about Tawny. Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:46, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Since Tawny has left the project, is this going to be archived? 15:33, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Well, she did give somebody permission to work on it, I think. Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:57, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

If someone takes over, blur the shading. 23:28, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

She said I could take over, but I still have my Jag photo up, and I'm pretty sure that has to be archived first. :P - 02:17, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, when you get a chance to work on this, give him a torn ear :3 12:00, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. :P 03:49, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - And blur the highlights. Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:17, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

I will add the torn ear later. 20:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add some highlights? I know they're not required, but without them it sort of just looks like a solid black cat. 07:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Something is really messed up with Pixlr's highlighter. -.- Should I redo this? 15:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (a) - For Approval
20:10, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

My first cat. I don't know about it... 15:43, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Plumwillow.apprentice.png and blur the earpink.Also, I'm pretty sure this is over the limit.-- . Silverstar  . talk  15:50, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good and like silverstar said blur the pink ear XXRainfeatherXx 15:54, August 10, 2010 (UTC)Honeyfeather

I think it's blurred enough, but the corner is touching the ear, make it shaped and make it lighter. Frostheart ♥  17:14, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too pink. Make it a bit darker. It's amazing for your first cat! Rain breath  17:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The top of the haunch needs blurring. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:01, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Er... like Silverstar said, this is the 38th charart up for approval on this page, which is over the limit. This project talk page is only allowed to have 35 sections (chararts for approval) at a time. 雨晶須 夏天來了! 21:53, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

So what do I do? Should I make the corrections or is this taken down and sorry, I miscounted.68.84.233.244 23:29, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! That was me. I thought I was signed in. 23:31, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the ear pink not touch the line art, darkened it and blured the shading and thanks Rainbreath. 19:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

You still have to rename it to Plumwillow.apprentice.png --''' . Silverstar. talk '''00:13, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

I forgot to mention that, but I did it. 01:32, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, you didn't. You called it Plumwillow_Apprentice.png. I know it's pretty small, but hey, my coal warrior one was originally called Coal.Warrior and they changed it for one capital letter. ♫ mosspool ♫  the new dovesong! 05:53, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, sorry mosspool, I fixed it now. Is there anything I need to change with the image? 16:00, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller. 20:11, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and darken the haunch shading. 00:27, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened and blurred shading.--Will oww hisp GOWARRIOR CATS 02:25, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the shading around his hind-leg, and maket the ear-pink lighter. 04:10, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know how to fix the shading on her hind leg because every time I blur it, it gets bigger. What sould i do 18:26, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

On the blur tool, make it a very small brush and zoom in so that you can blur in detail around the haunch area. Blur thoroughly in that area so there are no hard lines between any transitions. The ear pink color is fine in my opinion. -- 03:23, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better? 19:09, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights slightly. 19:51, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred highlights. 15:33, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading a bit more and make the ear pink smaller-- 01:29, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better? 15:26, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The highlights look beautiful, but the one on her front leg is in the middle of the lineart. I think you should move it back some, so it's more in the middle.

Re-uploaded Better? 01:18, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks lovely. CBA? 09:13, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a lighter. It looks purple right now. I feel so bad for ruining CBA. Dx 02:23, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry Frostheart, if it's not ready then I understand. I'm at my mom's work so when I get home I'll fix it. 20:13, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, now that I don't have to feel bad about ruining CBA (lol Frostheart), it looks to me like there's this little dent on the top of the earpink. Perhaps you could smooth it out a bit? 05:15, August 25, 2010 (UTC)


 * Might I just say that it's not about 'ruining CBA' because when a senior warrior puts that on an image it's a matter of their opinion that the image is ready. The whole point of having CBA is that this project isn't a dictatorship and that the senior team aren't infallible. =) 12:31, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed, Sandy, but you got to know that feeling where you see "CBA" and you go OMG MY CHARART IS ALMOST APPROVED and you get all excited and then somebody comments and it's all like "noooooooo...." lol you know what I mean? 20:04, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine though, I only saw Frosthearts thing and then Sandy's. Anyway, better? 20:10, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Maybe blur the shading on the top of the haunch a TEENSY bit. Just a tiny bit and then it looks perfect to me =) -- 21:12, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight near the shoulder. 22:46, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-upload Better? 23:52, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more still. 17:45, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, its like hot pink right now. Also blur the shading on the haunch a bit. -- 03:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'm so sorry about my inactiveness if that is the real word. I have had a sleep away camp till now and I'm at my mom's work, but the computer won't download the pic so I will do this for sure when I get home, but I am in another camp now so this will be done in about...10 hours. Again, I'm really sorry. 12:30, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

It's alright. For the image, it is lovely and well done, I just see that the haunch shading needs blurring. 14:08, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better? 03:07, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

It needs a bit more blurring, then it will be ready. 17:36, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlighting and ear pink. I am famous for being PICKY about ear pinks! JK, I'm not famous. 03:12, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the upper haunch, there's a pretty obvious separation between shadow and highlight there. 13:09, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm having a lot of trouble with the haunch shading. Could some one help me if I don't have it right. 14:50, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch a bit to the right and move the shoulder highlight up a bit and change the earpink colour slightly - it's kinda purple. -- 01:56, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm is this okay? I tried to fix it up but IDK. 00:12, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight up a bit and triangulate the earpink and then it's perfect. -- 04:23, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular. The ear pink looks neon... ish. I suggest changing the color or lightening it? Sunny Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...06:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights. Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 17:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed, blur the highlights, and on the haunch the shading looks odd against the highlight, blur it together more. I guess I'm making my return. 火の毛皮 18:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Skipper (Ro)-For Approval
Here's Skipper. I didn't know what his eye color was, so I made a lucky guess. It's my first charart, so I hope you like it! Mist fire  16:23, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blurr the shading, it looks pretty good! ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 16:38, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur the white transition. Darken the shading a bit and blur it well-- 17:34, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it much more. Make the ear-pink more noticeable. 19:39, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the shading and tried to blur it, as you can see. Personally, I think this one's worse. Darkened ear pink, et cetra. Mist fire  16:50, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Now there are three different shades of orange on him, it just looks kind of strange. 18:26, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading kind of looks like it's layered. Blur it as much as you can =) Earth  bender Tawny Style! 18:41, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is too small and bright. The line-art is blurred a bit on his legs and near the tail. 02:31, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add highlights to the flank, shoulder, and face. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 05:05, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. 18:17, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

What Frostheart said. Anyways, blur the shading and add somre more near the tail and on the tail. 17:27, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This ok?

Darken the ear pink, blur the shading a lot. Blur the white transition. Remember to sign-- 03:51, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred line art on the base of his tail. 13:32, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

it will look perfect to me if you just blur the shading and blur where the orange meets the white. Sunny frost  13:34, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. And if you want, add just some more highlights on his haunch. Willowheart May StarClan light your path! 00:52, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Reuploaded. I made the earpink a lot darker, and Blurred orange/white section. I seriously don't think I can blur shading much more, folks. Mist fire  15:35, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

If you can't blur it more, then make the darker part lighter, or the light part darker. :P 19:37, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Then smudge it, then blur. That should work. Darken the ear pink, it blends in with the pelt color, making it hard to be visible. 21:03, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the orange-white transitioning. 22:03, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 03:11, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The nose-pink looks orange to me. 19:30, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more of a reddish color. 20:56, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Line-art is blurred a tiny bit near the tail, the back leg area, and blur the orange transition towards the head. 20:06, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Smudging and then blur the orange. That might help, because it looks like 2 seperate layers. Willow heart  1231  01:43, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Reuploaded. I redid it. The shading is really blurred and I also blurred the white/orange part. Mist fire  00:02, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, and white-orange transitioning. Darken the shading; I can hardly see it. -- 17:27, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading, blurred orange/white + earpink. Mist fire  19:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. -- 19:32, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more, XD 03:24, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading. Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 16:43, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading some more, and blur the ear pink.-- 19:13, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading. Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 18:04, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink-- 22:01, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading and earpink. Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 18:49, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more and darken the ear pink a bit more. -- 18:52, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid it. I'm honestly thinking about withdrawing it and doing something else. I really can't do the shading right. Does one of the senior warriors or deputy or leader allow me to do this? Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 17:45, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Any user can withdraw an image whenever they want by changing the title from "(Character Name (Rank)) - For Approval" to "(Character name (Rank)) - Withdrawn (or withdrawing)." You don't have to get permission to withdraw an image. However, if you withdraw an image, it's likely that another user will want to take over the image for you and finish what you've started. 19:28, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Harveymoon (KP) - For approval
Well here he is! I don't think he's to bad but then he's my first charart uploaded on here. Comments but nothing rude or too mean please! ♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:03, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Remove the earpink from his left our right ear and blur the shading more. Nice job. 22:07, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Remove the ear-pink on the right and blur it. Make the shading a bit more noticeable. 22:09, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded~ Better? His shading was a bit picky but I made it more noticeable. <font color="Aqua" style="background:Black">♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:27, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:48, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the warpink smaller. Then blur it. 23:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Moonflight. Also, blur the shading and add more shading top the top of the shading and back legs. His eyes are also a bit bright, but that probably doesn't matter too much. 05:35, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I had to redo his body so I could do the shading on it. Its blurred as much as I can without damaging the lineart and earpink is smaller I didn't change the colour of his eyes because they look fine to me. <font color="Aqua" style="background:Black">♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 21:43, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading much much more and make the ear-pink like a triangle. 00:32, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. You can go over the line art, or maybe shrink the size of the blur tool. Add some shading right underneath his collar. A good example right now I think would help you is Velvet (underneath). But you don't have to listen to me because I'm only an apprentice. Ha ha =D. <font color="Aqua" style="background:White">Willowheart May StarClan light your path! 00:44, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Tansy, I think you may have sharpened the shading instead of blurring it, because it was a lot more blurred before. :P Oh well, everyone makes mistakes. If you use pixlr, the blur is the tear drop. If you use GIMP, just make sure the blur/shapren tool is set to blur, not sharpen. 03:48, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Put the blur tool on 100 and blur the shading as much as you can. 11:33, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur. Add shading to the paws and arm, and face. Blur the ear pink. 18:33, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:36, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-done - Thickened and blurred on 100. Don't worry Willowheart I listened <font color="Aqua" style="background:Black">♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:02, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs serious blurring, and make the ear pink more triangular. 22:05, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. You need to blur the shading a whole bunch so it looks more natural. Sunny frost  22:16, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I changed the section title. Remember it is usually KP when submitting a kittypet. As for the image, it's too dark, he looks like a pale gray cat, lighten it, and use a less concentrated brush for the highlights. =) user:Mousetalon 22:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred a lot and I had to re-do the body so I hope he's ok for now because I'll be going off soon also earpink was blurred as well.<font color="Aqua" style="background:Black">♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:38, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink like a triangle. The shading seems blotchy and uneven now. 23:05, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs more blurring. 13:20, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and the shading on the right forearm (the forearm we can see) looks uneven, try to fix it up, I can't really explain how it looks.... 14:20, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

You still really need to blur the shading. And there is some blurred lineart by his right ear. Sunny frost  17:25, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton. His head is blurred and a little bit where the fore-arm steps out. 17:50, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still looks square'ish (lol) make it more triangular. -- 04:47, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Better? Dawny don't worry I understood the earpink did look more like a rectangle. Anyway I'm going on holiday from tomorrow till Friday so I won't be able to update him for a while but when I get back I'll be right on the case. <font color="Aqua" style="background:Black">♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 21:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I changed the section title again, remember it's KP for kittypet. And center the ear pink. 22:50, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, but well done! River pelt Deputy of StormClan 01:36, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Change the ear-pink to the angle of the line-art. 01:41, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should blur the ear pink Sunny  frost  22:17, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur the shading some. Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:57, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, it looks a bit unnatural. And shift the ear pink to our right a little, to match the angle - oh, wait someone already said that... xD 13:46, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back a lot. 18:33, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. 18:07, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

add some highlights, he looks gray. blur the shading. Sunny frost  22:46, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional and his pelt color is fine. - 22:47, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Willow heart  1231  00:42, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Blur the ear-pink. 04:22, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

He looks gray. Make him look white. 03:01, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

I think the main reason people say it looks gray is because the shading is a bit too dark. Lighten it, or blur it alot. 14:20, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I thought the pelt colour was fine. Well I'll lighten the shading like silver said <font color="Aqua" style="background:Black">♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 18:38, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Ah that was a lot of blurring. I did what silver said lightened shading and blurred it a lot. When I saved it it looked gray but on pixlr and when I uploaded it it was the pale gray-white colour. <font color="Aqua" style="background:Black">♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 19:05, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the earpink. -- 23:34, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading. 15:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Velvet - For Approval


Mmm. Constructments? -- 22:18, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading on her back a little bit. <font color="Aqua" style="background:Black">♫ Tansy ♫ So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:30, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading on the back is great.There's nothing I can say. :D 22:33, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, make this more silvery, right now it looks pale gray. Darken the ear pink a bit more and blur it-- 22:53, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks fine. This is lovely, Bramble, I can't find anything wrong with it other than the above comments. 00:26, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

She looks pale gray, not silver. And may I suggest more highlights, because I've found thye help make silver cats look. . . well, more silvery. (That may sound strange XD) Other than that, this looks great! 05:33, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more 'silvery' 10:33, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more, and maybe add some more highlights (like on the tail?) <font color="Aqua" style="background:White">Willowheart May StarClan light your path! 00:41, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

lol 'silvery' Anyways, I'd just say to....um...did I mention that this was AMAZING!!!

The shading makes it seems 'silvery' to me. But darken it a little bit. 19:35, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

There's an tiny speck of blurred lineart up by the ear pink. You can't really see it, though. 21:32, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I see it now that you mention it. xD Darken the shading on his back. 23:06, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps add some highlights because she looks kinda shadowy. That's just my opinion, though. -- 04:18, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Forestheart, Velvet is a girl. And, yeah, add some highlights on the head, back, and possibly tail. Sunny frost  17:38, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

My mistake, Sunnyfrost. Highlights are optional, and I personally prefer this deep look. 17:51, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Just my opinion -- 05:44, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the dark shading makes it look 'silvery' xp 01:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you ask me, the dark shading just makes it look. . . gray. 02:15, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Silver is a shade of gray. I think the pelt color is fine. 14:48, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's a very dull shade of gray, silver is brighter. Elorisa -sama  15:18, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink line-art is blurred a tiny-bit. 20:10, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I dunno, I like the color. Maybe, MAYBE, blur the shading on her right haunch some. But only if it doesn't mess up the rest of the shading, which looks AWESOME! Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 21:00, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Y'all had a field day with this one. I've added very subtle highlights, blurred thoroughly in suggested places, and fixed the blurred lineart on the ear. -- 03:25, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

She looks amazing! CBA? 23:15, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's still to pale. Darken it more and it should be good-- 23:52, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading 142.161.238.236 21:37, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

(Oops, i wasn't logged in!) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' Tigerstar's best bud!! 21:40, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Dappleclaw to blur the shading. I also think you should add more highlights, because to me she still looks dull. 21:25, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

I very much do not want to change her color. That's the thing about working with book characters; you don't actually see their color. So you have nothing to compare this with. She's not orange or purple, she's a very respectable shade of pale gray, which is considered silver. She is also mentioned as a gray cat in the dialogue; I can provide page numbers if necessary. I will work on the shading tomorrow when I have more time. -- 03:29, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

You don't need to, Bramble, I believe you. But I always thought silver was just, like, a shade of gray, but I always imagined silver to look. . . well, it's hard to explain. When you google silver cat the pictures. . . they just look different! Ugh, I don't know how explain. I guess it's be more like Moonflower's base colour, is you ask me. 01:51, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

I honestly think the image looks fine. Definitely got some resemblance to silver, but most users point of view it is pale gray. I think It should stay the way it is. <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 06:19, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Shading should be blurred now. Hopefully this can get off the page now; I'm sorry my intervals between uploading are few and far between. -- 03:19, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure it can. :) CBA? 14:59, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Percy (R)-For Approval
I withdrew my other one so... here's Percy! I actually kinda like this one xD. Comments? --- 11:02, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hm...I've never seen Percy as a character before. The ear pink is too big and kinda a odd shape. 12:19, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't this over the limit? There can only be 35 up for approval and this is the 36th. River pelt Deputy of StormClan 13:06, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, Nettlsplash is being withdrawn, so this is fine. Anyway, fix up the earpink. 13:15, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I didn't see that. XD But yeah I agree with Beautiful Oblivion and Silverdapple! River pelt Deputy of StormClan 13:28, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

i think you should make the earpink smaller. but im just an apprentice so idk. Sunny frost  13:29, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is too big. Blur the stripes more. 14:24, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Shrink the ear pink so its not as big as we think, then blur the stripes on the fur

ha ha I got that from Zorth ;P (i made up the las part) and now this means I can't do Percy when Rockshade gets approved :( (DON'T WITHDRAW THOUGH!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD!)

Reuploaded Thanks, Tawny!! And, sorry, I didn't know you were planning to do his image too. xD Anyways, I blurred the stripes and fixed the ear pink. What else? --- 20:17, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some more shading? I'm an apprentice as well... <font color="Aqua" style="background:White">Willowheart May StarClan light your path! 00:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

lol willow, i second that last part. but i think it looks great, me being an apprentice :P Sunny  frost  01:10, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried adding some more shading, but it didn't go so well. I couldn't blur it because it made the stripes unevenly blurred xD. I just added some to the head. Anything else? --- 01:19, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes and darken the entire thing just a bit. 02:03, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added more stripes and darkened the whole thing. Anything else? --- 10:38, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur it a bit more? 15:31, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

lol its okay Cherr Cherr (mah new nickname for you!!O.O) anyways, I'd just say to blur and center the earpink :P

Reuploaded Lol, Tawny! Thanks for the new name :P Anyways, I blurred the earpink and centered it. Anything else? --- 20:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes on the belly and make the ear-pink like a triangle. 23:06, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I believe you meant the chest. The stomach has enough stripes. 01:49, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I mean the front part of it. 04:30, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well... I just added some stripes to the chest and I made the earpink like a triangle. Anything else? --- 11:22, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. -- 18:23, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is just me experimenting, but try making the stripes reach down farther. Don't save it if you don't like it, but it could give it a more...tabby effect. 18:33, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I centered the ear pink, but for the stripes, I tried to do that but, it made the stripes meet each other so I just left it with the short stripes. Anything else? --- 11:07, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some stripes to the paws. 18:00, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes to the paws. What else? --- 01:05, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add stripes to the back legs. 01:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yup add stripes to the back and front right legs other than that Nice!! ShadowandBlue 13:53, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes to the back and front right legs. Anything else? 15:26, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art is blurred a lot in various places and blur the highlights. 20:12, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the highlights, but I wasn't sure where the blurred lineart was... other than that, what else? 23:19, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Theres blurred line-art along the back and tail. Shrink the ear pink a tad. -- 23:59, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? 11:28, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are really. . . round. IDK, make them pointier if that makes sense. Also add more stripes to the shoulder, there's none there. Darken the ear pink and nose, lighten the eyes. 20:33, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't make the stripes pointier, though I tried xD. It made it look... strange xD. Should I just leave it like this or should I try to make it pointier again? Other than that, is there anything else? 11:10, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, or darken the shading. -- 22:07, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, because they look unnatural. But it could just be my computer screen... Willow heart  1231  00:39, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Make the earpink smaller. 04:25, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? 20:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes to tail and face. Blur highlights and darken shading.-- 01:14, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? 12:01, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Mmm.... I just realized my changes weren't showing up.... I'll try again in a day or too, if I have time. 22:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It shows my changes now. Anyway, is there anything else for me to do? 16:06, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) - For Approval


MY FIRST CHARART!!!! =D

Elorisa has yet to decide, which means so have I. The striped style or the patched tabby style? The patched tabby style looks more like Elorisa's, but I like the regularly-striped one better. Even though it doesn't look very much like Elorisa's. Anyways, comments? =D 02:37, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink needs to be bigger. The patched one looks really blotchy to me. Do the striped one more like the Creekfeather one up for approval. :P 02:42, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Will do. But even though the second one is prettier, it doesn't really look like Elorisa's and I couldn't get the patched tabby one to look... well.. patched-tabby-ish lol ... Argh... -- 02:48, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed earpink -- 03:01, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like the patched tabby. Blurr the stripes on the striped one a bit. <font color="Silver">Ic <font color="Thistle">eh <font color="Violet">ea <font color="Orchid">rt    <font color="Violet">Will the thaw ever come?  03:37, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

All of them? Or certain ones? Specific, please =) -- 04:59, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the stripes a little bit. Problem, though. I use GIMP, and, unfortunately when I saved this as a .png (because the wiki can't upload .xcf s) I accidentally forgot to save it as a .xcf as well, so now my little flashing line around the lineart is gone and I can blur the lineart where I couldn't before. So I'm having issues working on it without blurring or drawing on the lineart. Does anybody have suggestions? -- 05:17, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really help with that. I just save it on png on Gimp and it's fine. As for the image, make the striped one more like zigzags unless you like it this way. Blur the ear-pink a bit more. 15:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Second one. Blur the stripes there and lighten it. On the first one, darken the patches. 18:31, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the patched one. 23:08, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like how the patched one looks, but the stripes one needs to lightened. <font color="Silver">Ic <font color="Thistle">eh <font color="Violet">ea <font color="Orchid">rt    <font color="Violet">Will the thaw ever come?  00:58, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Patched: thickened shading, added a few patches, blurred earpink. Striped: dodged whole image with a brush on 10% exposure, fixed lineart issue (THANK YOU ICEHEART), blurred earpink. Better? -- 01:16, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Both images: darken the head shading, it's not visible. 01:48, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Both images: Darken the ear pink. Patched one: blur it more. 02:59, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

What should I blur? The earpink? -- 03:10, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

If you decide on the regularly striped one, I'd say blur the stripes, and add more striping to the legs, face and tail. 21:50, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay, I'll add more stripes to the legs, but the tail I tried to copy from the warrior pic, which doesn't have as many stripes, I think, and could you give me some tips on how to stripe the face? I tried when I was first making it, but it just looked stupid, so I took them off -- 05:39, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Elorisa has decided on the patched one 13:19, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes she has. So, define the stripes, as I said before, it looks blotchy--ish. xD 20:10, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can you take out the stripe by the eye? it looks like its coming out of the eye. Sunny frost  20:19, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

It does not matter. Elorisa chose the patched one. 23:08, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

oh ok Sunny  frost  23:19, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is taking so long, but I'm working on renovating my bedroom. Please don't decline, as I AM working on it. Comments noted. -- 22:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

The spot on his haunch looks funny. Either remove it, lighten it up, or add little speckles around it. (Sorry if I sound demanding!) Willow  heart  1231  00:36, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Add some spots to the face to, it just kind of stops ina line on the the neck.--  <font color="Silver">Ic <font color="Thistle">eh <font color="Violet">ea <font color="Orchid">rt     <font color="Violet">Will the thaw ever come? : 19:25, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any more comments? -- 18:08, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

He is very pretty, just blurr the highlight on his face a little more and he's purrrrrfect;)-- I c e    h e  a r  t♥  : 00:08, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded This look good? -- 01:40, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading. -- 22:13, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thickened shading and added a few patches. Comments? I am desperate to do whatever it takes to get this approved XD -- 03:33, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks really dark along the back and haunch. Lighten it a tiny bit. 18:05, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can you tell? For some reason, it looks like it didn't reupload. Is that silly? Is it just me? -- 06:41, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded again' Checking to see if the uploader is working. If not, I'll try again in the morning. Any more comments? Please? I love comments XD 08:39, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Egg (A)- for Approval
I think it came out horrible, but comments? River pelt Deputy of StormClan 19:20, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The torn ear looks like the line-art is...gray or faded? :P 19:34, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Sorry about that! =P River pelt Deputy of StormClan 19:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's still faded and gray/whiteish. The tail highlight is really bright. 20:15, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

the torn ear is still gray/faded. Sunny frost  20:17, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yupp. The tail looks a little to bright. (: ShadowandBlue 23:03, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be darker. 23:24, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more highlights and blur them (I know highlights are optional, but you already have them so I'm pretty sure I can make suggestions for them) Thicken the shading. 00:08, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Okay, I redid him, I fixed the torn ear (so everyone knows there is no gray/white on it, and is not faded.), I darkened the ear pink, lightened the tail, and brightened the highlights. River pelt Deputy of StormClan 23:18, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

It's still faded, I checked up close. :P  04:56, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

But there's no gray and it's not faded when I checked it. How should I fix it? River pelt Deputy of StormClan 11:42, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

I could help if you want. 15:39, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

k, so should i thicken the lineart on the ear, would that help? River pelt Deputy of StormClan 18:34, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

No, someone would have to fix it for you. - 00:55, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Okay so who knows how to fix it? River pelt Deputy of StormClan 20:45, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

I opened this up on Pilxr, and the ear didn't seem faded to me at all, it looks fine. Just darken the shading. -- 22:05, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

I opened it up on pixlr and it is. I'm not sure if you would like it, but I fixed it. 03:46, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. thanks Frostheart and Dawny for the help! I'll get to it ASAP! River pelt Deputy of StormClan 18:43, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink just a tad more. Willow heart  1231  00:31, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred ear pink more. Srry it took me a while to load, I started school yesterday. So it may take me a bit to reupload images. =P River pelt Deputy of StormClan 22:22, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is great overall. -- 23:14, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks! I darkened the shading and blurred it as far as it could go. River pelt Deputy of StormClan 13:00, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The lineart for the torn ear needs to be the same thickness as the rest of the lineart. Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:33, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thickened torn-ear lineart. River pelt Deputy of StormClan 15:23, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers (SC) - For Approval
First black cat. Hopefully it doesn't suck.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  00:55, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger. 01:14, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look really really bright. While you're making the highlights bigger, add one to the back and tail. And the face highlight seems really low down. 02:17, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the eyes, add more highlights on the tail. Echofall Fate is in your paws 02:36, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Lighten the face highlight. Darken and blur the ear pink. Other than that, this is well done. 14:01, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  14:53, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to make the highlights a bit bigger on his flank. Make the ones on the tail more noticible. 14:56, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

This is weird...the new edits aren't showing up. You can see them on the two previous uploads before this one on the file history, but it's not showing up here.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  14:42, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight bigger, add a highlight to the tail, and lighten his muzzle just a bit. Willow heart  1231  00:23, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

I did all those things, and I reuploaded it, but the new version isn't showing up on the page.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  14:45, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I uploaded it as a new file entirely, so now it's working.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  14:49, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blurr the highlights on the tail and haunch. -- I c e    h e  a r  t♥  : 21:33, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur Highlights. -- Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 16:44, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:35, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Dark Whiskers.sharpclaw 22:11, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

I had to name it Dark Whiskers.Sharpclaw2 because of the error I described above.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:47, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

But that's fixed now. Change the file name to Dark Whiskers.sharpclaw 21:52, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Just changed it right now.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:08, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are really concentrated, they look like spots. Blur the highlights. --<span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 06:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

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Creekfeather (K) - For Approval
Eh, my apologies, his markings look much like the ones on his warrior/apprentice images. I can redo it, but for now, here he is. Comments? TheBlindApprentice 22:43, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Creekfeather doesn't have an apprentice or a warrior image so I don't know what you are talking about. Darken the shading and blur it thoroughly, it is very blotchy right now. Add more tabby stripe and add ear-pink. 22:45, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. This is over the limit, so this will have to be declined. Try again when theres avaliable space. -- 23:10, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's fine. I just declined Egg's image, so this is under the limit. 23:37, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

. Blur it, I agree with Frostheart that it does look blotchy. Also, add ear pink. Make the ear pink a lightish color. Willow heart  1231  23:51, September 2, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

I agree with Frostheart about adding more tabby stripes. And if you're going to add some on the legs and/or haunch, you should lighten those areas; the legs and haunch seem to be the same color as the stripes. 00:39, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Creeakfeather has apprentice and warrior images up for approval, this needs to match those stripes. Otherwise, blur the shading and highlights. 02:58, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Creekfeather needs to be patched. 03:06, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I thought Creakfeather was a tabby? 13:28, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Er, I think there was a discussion a while ago, and Elorisa decided that Creekfeather should be patched. 13:49, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, my image is a tabby, it just looks patched. Elorisa -sama  19:44, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

LOL, I don't think you can decide to change the character's appearance. It's just the stripe style Elorisa used, that's all. 21:35, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. :P But this looks tabby, not patched, so..xD Could you modify it to change the other images? 22:35, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

It supposed to be tabby...just blur the stripes. It can be fixed. 19:54, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Um.. you should probably add earpink XD --

I see ear-pink..o_o 14:35, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

REALLY? The ears are gray for me.... like just plain gray... weird. Does anybody else see it or am I crazy? =P -- 22:56, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

No ear pink here either 01:31, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the ear pink fine. Darken the stripes on the forearms and tail-- 01:37, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened stripes and added highlights. Sorry for the wait, I was kinda distracted. TheBlindApprentice 17:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This needs to look like his warrior image which has been approved. 00:58, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for creating such a hard image to copy xD. This looks wonderful, just blur the highlight on his chest. 11:53, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (R) - For Approval
http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100903171448/warriors/images/0/00/WhitethroatRouge2.png

It's my first PCA charart! :3 Critique? -- Blossom sky  15:27, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions, add/darken shading, and make his whole body lighter; I can hardly see the lineart. 16:30, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Oblivion, though I can see the lineart just fine. Blur the earpink. 16:33, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' Blossom sky  17:16, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blurr the shading a ton Dappleclaw Tigerstar's best bud!! 17:19, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the white transition on the back hind paw a little less straight, and blur the shading a lot like Dappleclaw said. You might want to add some highlights, though they're optional. 18:18, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add an eye then add white to it 18:42, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition. Maybe darken the image just a tad. Blur the shading as well. This is very good for your first PCA Charart :) -- 20:49, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

The leg line-art is blurred a lot. Make the shading thicker and blur it. There's something wrong with the eye, it needs a white pixel. Make the ear-pink bigger and make the whtie belly a bit bigger and blur it. 17:57, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear coloring a bit pinker and blur the shading along the belly and legs. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 23:21, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. For some reason, it won't let me sign! Gah. 17:57, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 20:25, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Ther is blurred line art on the paws.<font color="Violet">Mossleap <font color="Orange">You burnt my ice cream!!!  23:52, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Shading needs to be darkened and blurred. Tawny (Talk) 00:48, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading.<font color="Yellow" style="background:Purple">Sunstar27 'Be true to your dreams... 15:26, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomsky, are you still working on this? The last time it was reuploaded was a week ago... If not, the image may be declined. 19:09, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D) - For Approval
Here she is. My first Charart in a while. Comments? 15:30, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, darken the earpink, and darken the haunch shading. 16:04, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having issues with this image. This is Hollytail's image, Not mine. I'm not sure what went wrong... 16:49, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is happening to me with Nettlesplash. Cherryfur123's image is showing up, not my own. :( 16:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Then your pressing Overwrite the Existing image with yours. Don't press that, you will have to re-name yours. 20:35, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well, here's my image, I'll have to correct it later... 20:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. 03:15, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the haunch shadow and make it a bit bigger, and blur the huanch highlight. 17:41, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing just a tiny bit. Also, blur the highlights. 01:51, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur the earpink. Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:40, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA) - For Aproval
My first Charart for PCA !!!! Comments? <font color="Yellow" style="background:Purple">Sunstar27 'Be true to your dreams... 16:15, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Don't put it in a thumbnail. Also, rename this Yellowfang.mca.png. 16:32, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make it look like her medicine cat image ->Make her fur more like that, make the herbs yellow, add scars on her face. 16:34, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ill Re-Upload it tomorow! :D i wasnt sure wether she had scars or not, and i didnt know what colour the herbs were s'posed to be, so sorry. :) <font color="Yellow" style="background:Purple">Sunstar27 'Be true to your dreams... 17:02, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

'''why do the herbs have to be yellow?  Sunny  frost'''  19:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

The herbs don't have to be yellow, theres more then one type of herb, and its not like she would always be carrying around the same ones. Brighten the highlights and blur the shading. Also make the ear pink smaller. -- 20:40, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

They should be yellow for consitency, actually. 20:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it matters unless she's always holding the same herbs. The ear pink is too big, and darken the shading/add highlights for consistency. 21:32, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Oblivion. Also, add shading to the legs and blur it a lot. The ear-pink is too big and blur the highlights. 22:26, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the herbs make a big difference; like Mosspool said, she's not always holding the same herbs. But maybe add more highlights and make the fur look more like her medicine cat image. 23:41, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

oh ok. i was just wondering so sorry for doing it in bold and underline. shrink the ear pink and blur it. try to fix up some of the highlights on the tail, it looks like one side it dark gray and the other side it Yellowfang color. Sunny frost  00:37, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

As far as I'm aware, the herbs don't have to e the same color. There are more than one type of herb. I would blur the shading, and add highlights (they are optional, but well worth it on a black/gray cat.) Darkhallows... Mew? 00:46, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks light gray, make it darker. 17:56, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks fine. If it were light gray, it would look like this:

14:53, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look light gray, but in comparison to her other images it's quite a bit too light. 03:30, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hi guys, sorry, ive re done it but its taking a g e s to upload so ill do it later,Ive changed the herbs, changed the earpink, darkend the shading and blurred them, blurred the highlights darkened her colour, but i dont know how to shade her tail, so ill have to get some help on that. sorry for taking ages, and thankyou for your comments! <font color="Yellow" style="background:Purple">Sunstar27 'Be true to your dreams... 16:30, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh scars! umm, should i add them or not?<font color="Yellow" style="background:Purple">Sunstar27 'Be true to your dreams... 16:30, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

I believe we already discussed that you should add them. So, yes. 19:15, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

 *Re-Uploaded*  Comments?I dont like how it came out though. :/ <font color="Yellow" style="background:Purple">Sunstar27 'Be true to your dreams... 15:22, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur, or use some other method of making them less distinct. Also, I don't think herb color is that important. I mean, we're focusing on the cat, not the yarrow, right? Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:46, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, scars, and ear pink 20:50, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and thickened a bit. Add shading to the herbs. Also, darken the shading and blur the highlights. 22:10, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Try to lighten the image a bit so it matches the medicine cat, and blur the SCARS not stripes (lol I <3 u Frostheart) Earth  bender Tawny Style! 21:11, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the scars, and mess up the fur more, like her Medicine Cat Picture. <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 23:33, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Please remember to put the date you reserved this on the reservations table. Darkhallows... Mew? 12:10, September 11, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

The highlights are too concentrated, spread them out more. 17:43, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better now, but the highlights are too concentrated and you need to make them furry. I can help you with that, if you want. 19:37, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it a bit smaller. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  16:52, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D) for approval
My first charart for the PCA!! Comments?

Good for you first charart! Try to blur the highlights and stripes. Tawny (Talk) 22:12, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

This looks silver, darken the highlights and make the whole cat darker, basically. There is blurred line-art near the tail, the legs, back, ear, and head. 22:22, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

rename it Stonetooth.deputy.png

Darken the highlights and blur the shading, make the ear pink smaller and darker. Add shading to the paws, base of the tail, and the head, and the ear not facing us. Overall, this is well done. 00:19, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes need to look more like he ones on his elder image: Here, they're thinner and don't stretch out as far. The tail stripes are also too thin, and he looks silver while in his elder picture Stonetooth is really more of a brownish-gray. 02:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Im not sure i can do all that on the original, should i just redo it? Iceflower 14:14, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

And how do you blur the stipes without blurring the line art? What pencil size should i use for the stripes? iceflower

Iceflower, look at the apprentice tutorials on the main PCA page. 15:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: 

It is now too dark. Make the ear-pink bigger and blur it. 17:24, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

should i use dodge tool or re-do it? ***Iceflower*** 17:38, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Probably the dodge tool, but if it still does not match, maybe you should redo it. 17:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:46, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: 

Lighten the pelt colour. Make the ear pink bigger and more triangular; its like a straight line right now. Also blur the shading a lot. -- 20:48, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Iceflower, overwrite the old image with the new one. You do not need to put a whole new image. 00:47, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Also, lighten the image still. It looks quite blotchy, darken the shading and define and blur the ear-pink. 03:02, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reploaded:

Blur the earpink a bit. And make the stripes reach down a BIT further. Tawny (Talk) 23:40, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the pupil is visible. Blur the ear pink, and back and haunch shading. 00:28, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

How do i make the pupil "visible"? it looks fine to me. i looked at other warriors images and copied the way they did the eye. ***Iceflower*** 16:48, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: 

I don't know if it made much difference, but i tried to make the stripes longer and blur the ear pink and shading. I'm still not sure what to do about the eye, Icestorm. By the way, how does an image get approved? It seems I have an endless amount of corrections to make! :P ***Iceflower*** 17:02, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I know this is not the right place to ask, but if anyone can show me how to amke siggys, that would be AWESOME! I have no idea how, and all you guys have cool siggys!! ***Iceflower***

There's a highlight line going down his body in the middle, I dunno if you did that on purpose, but you might want to blur that. 18:02, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Kay, thanks, i used bllur and burn tool. will reupload it soon. i just dont feel like it now. i know, LAZY! :P

Iceflower ☮  May StarClan light your path.....  

Reuploaded: Finally, i reuploaded. sorry for the long wait. it was a minor correction and i didnt feel the urgency........i had a busy day...... Iceflower ☮  May StarClan light your path.....  

The shading needs to be blurred, the entire thing's a bit dark and the stripes are too thick. 01:48, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too 'fat' xD This is still too dark. 02:15, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

What paintbrush size should i use for the stripes? or pencil size? also, this new upload may take a while.....i am quite busy........SORRY! :P Iceflower  ☮  May StarClan light your path.....  

Iceflower, look at the apprentice tutorials. 14:30, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, all the tutorials say to use different sizes. Size one is too small, and size three, which I used, you guys say is too fat!!! please help, just this one? Pretty please?? Iceflower ☮  May StarClan light your path..... 

The stripes size looks fine to me... 22:32, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Please add the date you resevered this on the reservations table. Darkhallows... Mew? 11:59, September 11, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

Thanks, Moonflight.

Darkhallows, I will, Thanks for telling me!!

Iceflower ☮  May StarClan light your path.....  

This is still too dark, also, the belly, back, and tail line-art is blurred. 20:09, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch more. The image looks very good! <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  16:55, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowflight(R) - For approval
First black cat and NEVER going back. This is my first charat for this project! 02:42, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blurr the highlights and make the ear pink bigger. I c e    h e  a r  t♥  : 22:13, September 3, 2010 (UTC) Darken the shading, blur the highlights, make the ear-pink bigger and more 'pink' This looks dark-gray, make it darker-- 22:21, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights on the shoulder and haunch bigger. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:45, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed ear pink, made shading darker, blurred the highlights, and darkened the overall color. The highlights won't blur anymore, so I think the highlights are good. Also, this shade is the darkest I can go without messing up the line art.

the neck and back are heavily blurred on the lineart; if its not supposed to look like that, fix it. Sunny frost  23:07, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art along the back is blurred -- 23:26, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sorry about the blurred line-art. I didn't notice it when I was blurring the shading. I had to delete and re-do the cat FOUR times because my old blurred cat was showing instead. Also, I have a ton of time today, so I will reupload a TON.

Thicken the shading, add more to the stomach, chest, paws, and muzzle/head. 00:18, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better?

Make it darker, still. Thicken and blur the shading. -- 01:01, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wait..who is this user? I don't see a sig and stuff. :P -- 01:02, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I just spent 30 min. blurring the shading. I know it sucks, I will spend all night working on it. I promise :)-- 03:35, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the legs. 14:57, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail, belly, and legs. This is still dark gray to me. :P -- 15:20, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Okay, I darkened the overall color as dark as I can go without messing up the line-art. I also added shading to the legs, belly and tail. Oh, and by the way, I stayed up all night blurring the StarClan out out the shading >.<

You need to darken the stomach and chest shading. Lighten the back shading. 19:44, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened stomach and chest shading. Lightened back shading.

Thicken the belly shading. 10:30, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thickened belly shading.

Blur all the shading, the eye seems a bit dark, and the ear pink looks purple.

Reuploaded - I made the eyes are icy-blue. I like it.

Nightflower, please rename this Swallowflight.rogue 23:49, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Renamed Okay, Oblivion. Renamed it. I accidentally had two Swallowflight.rouge on my computer, so my computer renamed it.

You didn't rename the file :S Rogue is still spelt wrong. Remember, the "u" comes after the "g". 00:03, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Renamed - Oh, silly me! I've spelled it that way my whole life >.< But besides my poor spelling skills, is there anything I need to change in the picture?

Blur and lighten the shading. Remember to sign. 00:48, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Okay, I did what you said Oblivion. The shading will not blur anymore. I have spent half an hour blurring the StarClan out of the shading. I can't really sign because whenever I sign, my signature is drops like, three lines. I don't want to take up too much space. See: 05:00, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Would you like me to blur it? Also, the belly lineart is smudged.-- Darkhallows... Mew? 16:14, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Re-did it. Is it better? I'm getting very frustrated with this charat :/

Yellowfang Alternate Medicine Cat- For Approval
Constructments? Sigh, I feel bad for putting this up because it makes me feel like I stole this chance from Flowerleaf. The furry texture was really hard, I had to redo the shading a million times, but I think the result is. . . okay.

How did you steal this from Flowerleaf? Anyways, make the ear-pink a tiny bit bigger. But other than that, it's great. 20:45, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Because I told her she needed to withdraw her Tigerheart kit image because he was never seen as a golden tabby kit, but for some reason, it still makes me feel mean. I'll get on that. 21:09, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

It won't let me overwrite it. . . I tried a bazillion times, and the correct version is at the bottom with the pevious versions. I even tried reverting it to the correct version, but it's not working. . . help. . . 21:16, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure..also, you have a black speck near the ear. Sorry about that random sentence. Maybe wait a day or two. 21:18, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, don't worry. I feel stupid cause now come to think of it, i dont think he was ever seen as a kit while golden tabby 22:27, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

That black speck's actually a grey speck, cuz I remembered to do her ears after I coloured her in, so I had to erase the excess ear colour but because of GIMP's stupid checkered grey background I missed it. In the correct version that's fixed. I'm glad you're not mad at me Flowerleaf :D 22:54, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Moss! But when was she described with a different pelt colour? Anyways, darken the paw shading and tail shading. I really like her. =) 00:26, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Look at her page, it says it there (there's a source, and I remember them refferring to her this way anyways :3) Sigh. I'll re-upload as soon as I can, it's just that the uploader isn;t working right now. But I'm still making changes, don't worry, I'll do it :3 00:31, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ Yes! The uploader's working for me now! I ended up redoing the tail shading cuz it looked funny and I did my best to fix what you guys told me to :3 20:07, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm... Should the herbs be all one color? 22:10, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Make the scars more noticible. 22:17, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Try to make the furry texture more noticeable. Willow heart  1231  22:19, September 6, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

I did what you guys said but now the uploader's being stubborn again. 23:08, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

It seems to be working now. 23:15, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ Yeah, it did now. I made the scars more noticable and I smudged the furry texture some more. Ehh. . . I don't know if I want to change the herbs. Does anybody else think I should? 01:48, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

No, the herbs are fine. Make her even more furry :D 01:51, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ Done! 01:44, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. This is really great. ^^ Darken the shading a tad. 02:17, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★. . . I think I killed it. Thanks, Frostheart ^ ^ I'm actually really proud of her :D 03:49, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

This looks excellent to me, but I think that the scars should be like they are on the other med cat image; the scars are on the face and the ears aren't nicked. 03:16, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

There were scars on her face. I don't know what happened, sorry. Uploader issues. I just gave her shredded ears because her appearance said she had them. :/ 01:47, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nothing wrong with the uploader; just my dumbness. I don't know if I want to get rid of the shredded ears. Well, if you guys think I should I will. 01:51, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shredded ears are part of the beautiful image Mosspool's made. I really don't think we should get rid of them, but thats you guy's choices :) <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 06:05, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't even see that her description said she had torn ears. Sorry. :P Good, because I loved the shredded ears on this image, anyway. C: I don't see anything else, so comments before approval? Great job on the image. 16:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Egg (Lo) - For Approval
-I'm really proud of this. =) I worked hard on it, and I really like the way how I did the shading. Comments? 23:52, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's really great. :D Make the ear-pink darker. 00:01, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading along his back. 00:05, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks Frost! I blurred the shading and made the ear pink darker. 00:09, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a tiny bit more noticible? 00:24, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

What about the shredded ear? :3 01:39, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, add the shredded ear. :P I can see the ear-pink fine, but make it more triangular. 02:36, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I added the shredded ear, took me lots of times. :P I also smudged the ear pink into a more triangular shape, and I darkened the ear pink a tad. 12:06, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on his ears. 20:34, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The torn ear looks a bit tufted. Make the tear more noticeable and not stick out-- 01:17, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head a bit. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  16:57, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Icy told me to tell you that she will be gone for a week and to not decline this Squirrel  Do You know... THE MUFFIN MAN!?!?!?!undefined  20:01, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowflight (W) - For Approval
- Nightshine put CBA on Sol's alt image, so this should be okay! This is my first black cat and charart for PCA. Constructments? -- Sun X Moss Best Friends Forever! 06:28, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add ear-pink, darken the shading a bit. Blur the highlights, they look a bit blotchy to me. 14:32, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

CBA or not the image is still on the page. Sorry but this is over the limit. 19:38, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Sol is archived, so this should be okay... Earth bender Tawny Style! 21:09, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Many images have been archived, so this should be fine. 22:55, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add an earpink, and if you want highlights make them a little bigger and add some to the tail. Dappleclaw Tigerstar's best buddeh!! 17:28, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this looks really nice, but I think his eye colour is different on his other image. And yes, add ear pink, I suggest using the ear pink colour on Hollyleaf's image because it looks great on black cats. Also, darken the entire thing a bit. 19:35, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Mosspool! I'm such an idiot for forgetting the ear pink. Comments? Sun X Moss Best Friends Forever! 22:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Wow I think it's georgus. --<font color="Navy" style="background:Magenta">Spottedwing 01:57, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and highlights. 16:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rowanfur (W)-For Approval
It's not very often I use this shading style and now I know why. Comments? 23:05, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more stripes near the face. :) 23:07, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

He has the same number of stripes on his face as his kittypet image does. 23:12, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes a bit. Blur the ear pink a bit more-- 23:13, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Shred the ear a bit more, it looks more shredded (?) in his kittypet picture. And sorry, didn't see the stripes near the eye. 23:15, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the legs a bit more. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:02, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks overblurred if I blur it anymore. I'm against darkening the stripes because 1. they're the exact same color as the ones on his kittypet image and 2. they're not going to get darker just because light is shinging on them. The ears look the same to me. Does it look different to anyone else? 12:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes they DO look different. On the kittypet pic it's like this: /W\ While on here it looks like /V\. On the ear closer to us anyway. 22:43, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

No, The ear looks fine Flowerleaf. Blur the shading a little more. <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...22:45, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Both ears and the shading loo fine to me. If you feel the need to change it, go ahead. I think it looks fine the way it is. 15:31, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, but I think the ears are different. On the kittypet image, it looks like each ear has two nicks in it, but on this image it looks like one ear has one nick in it and one ear has three or four nicks in it. Just fix the ears and I think this will be good; the shading's blurred just the same amount as it is on the kittypet image, and it looks good as it is now. 19:41, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (Alt A)-For Approval


Rainwhisker as he appeared in 'A Clan In Need' 23:16, September 10, 2010 (UTC) Someone get it out of this box! XD 23:18, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it. :P 23:19, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the spots and make the earpink darker (a little) and bigger. 00:36, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Making the earpink bigger wouldmake it too big, Iceheart. But yes, make it darker. Blur the spots. 01:17, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Made ear pink darker and tried to blur spots without over blurring. Didn't work XD. 01:28, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I remember it being said we didn't do alterntae images for when a cat was just shown in a picture a certain way because the artist guy always screws stuff up? 01:46, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I'm new here, remember that. 01:54, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a minute- what about Ice and Snake? They have alt images. 01:55, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the patches on his tail. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:06, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Better? 02:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think we should have this image here, we can only guess what color his fur and patches are. <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...06:22, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

You know, I was looking around for an image to do and saw on Rainwhisker's page in the Trivia section 'Rainwhisker is shown as a gray and white tom in A Clan in Need' 11:49, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It could be a gray tom with a white belly, if you know what I'm saying. ;) Also, in the trivia section, it does not have a source, so it could be false or something. :P 15:23, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Just went to Books a Million and checked A Clan In Need and it's true- he's a grey and white tom 16:14, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I see gray splotches around the image. Remove them. 20:41, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Something's wrong with Gimp- I can't do ANYTHING! It's stuck on blur when I was making another version more accurate to the manga and poof- It got stuck! 21:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sigh- I'm sad to do this but I'll withdraw this b/c of stupid Gimp. Someone can take over for me if they want.... 01:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

You may just need to restart your computer. GIMP freezes on me all the time. It works just fine after I restart it. 01:29, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! 14:02, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I put up another version more accurate to the manga up to consider. I don't know which one to use :P 15:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the first one looks better, but that's just my opinion. 15:39, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah but the second one's more accurate to the manga. 15:42, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Queen) - For Approval
Comments? Elorisa -sama  23:25, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more noticeable and the shading more noticeable too. 23:40, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is really light, darken it and blur the shading, otherwise, this is beautiful :) <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 03:55, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Sunny. Better? 12:22, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I still can't see the ear-pink. 15:21, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ice (Alt R)-For Approval
heres Ice as he is in "Shatered Peace". Comments? <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 23:29, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Iceheart already has this up for approval. 23:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Before you post something, check to make sure the information you are putting is absolutely correct. I do believe Iceheart had Snake up for approval, who is Ice's brother. Moreover, I've just approved Snake. -- 23:42, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Darken the shading a bit and blur the ear pink-- 23:46, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry Bramble. I thought Iceheart had Ice up. Blur the ear-pink. 23:51, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, i did Snake. Make the first stripe darker or blurr the second (i had the same problem). Maybe make the nose grey, because it's on the black fur. 00:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back and belly shading. 16:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Uploader's not working for me. :( <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 03:26, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a little less hot pinky. 18:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, less hot-pink. Also, make it bigger. 20:30, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nutmeg (Q) - For Approval
I thought her rogue charart was really beautiful, so here's the queen version! Comments?-- 23:46, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the transitions some more and blur the highlights. 23:51, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I smudged the black paw and tail tip. I didn't add any highlights-- 00:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. I meant the ear-pink. :3 00:07, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I blurred the ear pink a bit more-- 00:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is so beautiful! Make the ear pink bigger though. <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...04:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink bigger-- 04:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I love this! The white seems a little grey, though. Darkhallows... Mew? 11:59, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's just the shading, it looks slightly gray on her rogue image as well: -- 17:31, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a tiny bit on the white parts. It looks a bit too gray. 18:00, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened white shading some-- 18:18, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the patches don't go with her rogue image. It's a very well-done image, though. 20:19, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Which patches should I change?-- 23:27, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The orange on her haunch (by her tail) is orange with a black piece but on her other image, the black is atthe top of there and then it's white. Also, by her shoulder where there's orange there's a black piece, but that's not there on her rogue image. I think that's it. Also, lighten the shading more. It's still too gray. 01:46, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! Also, on her rogue image there's black on her tail. 07:15, September 12, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

Re-Uploaded changed the patches-- 16:57, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the front leg shading and it should be ready. 19:06, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred forearm shading-- 19:12, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the ear-pink and make it more noticiable. 20:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (W) - For Approval
I hope this looks alright! My fourth charart! :) Comment for approval? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading a bit, center the earpink and desaturate it. 01:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and darken the shading. 01:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:51, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger and blur them. =) 20:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little lighter. 22:02, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:07, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes look sorta unatural, but maybe thats just me. <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...22:42, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 23:55, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, it does look a bit un-natural. Maybe you should try another style of tabby? But again. might just me. 15:13, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

yes also there is a pixel on his chest that is not colored in <font color="Violet">Mossleap <font color="Orange">You burnt my ice cream!!!  18:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I was just trying to get the stripes to match up with the design on his medicine cat charart. But if you all think they need to be redone, I'll give it a go. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 19:17, September 12, 2010 (UTC)



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Well, I re-did the tabby pattern... What do you think? Comments? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 19:37, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I like how his stripes are now, make the ear pink a bit smaller. 19:50, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ends of the stripes sharper. 19:53, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink as well. 20:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:31, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Heathertail (alt. W)- For Approval
Heathertail. Need to fix the shading but not willing to let someone else get this spot. I'm going to fix it now. 00:52, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. Otherwise, this is great, Iceheart. :) 00:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened/messedw ith the shading. How many approved image do you need to be a warrior? This is gonna be my third so i'm hoping 3.-- 01:24, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Three, Iceheart. :) Thicken the shading on the belly. 01:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the entire thing, because on this she looks pale gray. Also, don't you think you should use the same eye colour that's on her other images? 01:54, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice! But, I'd add shading on the back of the left front leg. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:57, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- did as i was told. 02:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely job! Blur the shading on her flank. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:10, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

All you people are so nice. You all say how nice it is before you critasize(sorry i can't spell) it and it just makes me feeel good about myself XD. Anyways, i blurred and blurred and blurred until it could blur no more.-- 03:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like she has dark gray paws, lighten the paws and the tail tip! This is lovely! :3 <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...03:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yikes! I think she might have actually been an apprentice when they described her this way (I was the one who put the source on her alternate appearance) I believe it was just before she became a warrior, but I could be wrong. If I'm right, then you could just keep this up and quickly make the new image, and put Heatherpaw for approval instead of Heathertail, right? Can someone check for me? I don't have an available copy of Long Shadows right now. 05:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's probably a warrior if it is that late in the book, I re-read it recently. 05:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-upload-I checked before i started (I plan aheadXD) she was a warrior when she was called grey. 05:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The paws are still dark gray :P <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...06:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ya i just realized that, i thought it was because something was wrong with the uploader again, but nope it was just me. 06:12, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really pretty :3 Thicken the shading on the neck though. <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...06:23, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I hope you become a warrior, Iceheart. ;) Anyways, blur the ear-pink a bit more. 15:17, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks Sunny and Frostheart!!!! What next? 17:43, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the belly shading, still. 20:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thickened the shading, but if i do it anymore it just looks....bad. Comments? 20:28, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the midriff shading. 20:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Your comments have been noted. But the uploader's being flustrating, and not working, so I'm going to go to complaint to Wildheart instead of upload it a gazillion times. 22:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's been Re-uploaded!! What's everyone's thoughts and concerns now? 18:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks pretty good. Maybe, thicken the shading on the belly and make the ear-pink less... purple? XD 20:16, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's not purple to me, just a pinkish red. I enjoy that color. xD 20:31, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Snooky (W) ~*~For Approval
I'm not very proud of this...comments? -- 01:52, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur or smear the shading a bit on his chest and flank. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:00, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me, but make the ear pink darker. 02:25, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely Dawny! Blur the shading and darken the ear pink :3 <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...04:00, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks Sunny. Blurred shading, and darkened ear pink. -- 04:07, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks nice :) Sharpen the patches. 05:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really great. :) Sharpen the ear-pink. 15:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpen ear-pink, apart from that, it's good! <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks too deliberate, blur it. 17:36, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Sharpend the patches and ear pink. Blurred Shading...I don't think the changes are showing though. :\ -- 19:05, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tad bit bigger. <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...22:41, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Made the ear pink bigger but I don't think the changes are showing still. -- 03:28, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

The patch under the eye should extend a little further up Darkhallows... Mew? 12:01, September 12, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

Blur the patches and the shading. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  17:01, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Petalnose (W) - For Approval
Well, my first charart. Bad, but who cares!!!! Comments??? <span style="color:Maroon;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Silver;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Maroon;">Alpha  Power to the Pack!  01:54, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The eye has a purple tint 01:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add and darken the shading along her back and add some shadows between her ears on her forehead. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:59, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great for a first charart! Darken the shading along her back. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading around the whole thing, and possiblr lighten the tail a little. 22:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. -- 22:44, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Frecklewish (MCA) - For Approval
....Comments? 02:51, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make her stripes a bit thinner. 02:55, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, this doesn't look that much like her other image. Lighten it, add some specks to it, make the stripes thinner and add more-- 02:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Did my best =) 03:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit more golden. Add more stripes down her back. Darken the ear pink. Make the arm stripes longer. -- 03:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a smaller speckle above the one on her cheek? Define the patch on her flank. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Completely redid the stripes/markings, and darkened ear pink. 03:26, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add some specks on her chest. Darken the shading-- 04:02, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

On her other images she has more mottles and the stripes are rounder. 05:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her some more. 20:50, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:55, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Why is that one spot next to her eye so big? On her other versions she doesn't have a spot as big as that 19:05, September 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * -sigh- Re-uploaded and changed it. 19:13, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the reason this image is darker than Frecklewish's other two images is because not only are some of the mottled spots made like the tabby stripes are, but there are also mottled spots made by using the dodge tool for some lighter spots (I think). On this image there are only darker spots, but on the other images there are lighter spots as well, so add some lighter spots to this image. Also, did you add the highlights before you made the stripes or afterwards? I think that on the others the highlights were afterwards and made the image lighter. One more thing: I know that you got rid of the really big spot by the eye, but a decent sized spot should still go on the neck to match the other apprentice image, and because the neck looks really empty. Sorry for the really big and complicated paragraph, but hopefully it'll help. :) 19:54, September 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * I added the highlighs afterwards. I'll make the stripes more like the other images by changing the opacity of the stripes; hopefully that'll help, then I'll do all that other stuff you said xD 19:56, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink darker? :) 20:09, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Or, more pink, perhaps? 20:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (KP)- For Approval
My first kittypet, I really enjoyed doing Waspwhisker as a warrior, so I decided to do the kittypet version! Constructments? --<span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...03:49, September 11, 2010

Blur the white. 03:54, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. and define the ear pink. This is great! 03:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred white, darkened shading and defined ear pink. Thank you Dawny :) <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...04:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely, but the white markings look pale yellow. 05:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Mosspool :3 The white color is the same as his warrior image though! :) <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you<span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">command...06:01, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. It does look like a pale yellow. Blur the ear-pink. 15:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * pale yellow? Clearly my eyesight is going. The colour looks okay to me. 17:36, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes it does have a yellowish tint but it looks the same as his warrior image and is fine. Blur the transition on the paws a bit more. 18:13, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the belly shading extend farther into the belly, instead of being just a blob of shading. Also, blur the back shading near the tail. 20:38, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is a tiny bit of blurred-line-art on the front leg, though I bet no one would've noticed that..except for me. xD 20:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred shading on the tail, made belly shading larger, fixed line-art (Thanks Frostheart XD). I like how he turned out. :) <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...22:12, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his back. 22:29, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...22:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blurr the shading a ton Dappleclaw Tigerstar's best buddeh!! 01:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done! <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...03:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I, think you forgot to make his bell colored. <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 03:28, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Well Spotted Fiercestar! Thanks! 04:05, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink brighter. 20:08, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the color of the ear pink is fine, but define it some. 20:24, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sagepaw (A)- For Approval
Sagepaw as an apprentice. Comments? <font color="Aqua" style="background:Thistle">Dappledsnow <font color="Cyan" style="background:Blue">The new <font color="Silver" style="background:Cyan"> generation. 12:12, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur/darken the shading Darkhallows... Mew? 12:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

err...my Friend MAPLEPOOL has this charSpotteddapple 13:25, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

No..she has Birchfall alternate kit. Well, she has that uploaded. 14:23, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It won't let me upload the new version. <font color="Aqua" style="background:Thistle">Dappledsnow <font color="Cyan" style="background:Blue">The new <font color="Silver" style="background:Cyan"> generation. 16:22, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Still won't upload the new version. <font color="Aqua" style="background:Thistle">Dappledsnow <font color="Cyan" style="background:Blue">The new <font color="Silver" style="background:Cyan"> generation. 17:43, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make his image lighter, like his warrior version ->He is pale gray, after all :D 19:23, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more noticiable and blur the shadings. Also, the highlight on his haunch looks blotchy. 20:06, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger and lighten the image. 20:29, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Pikepaw (A)-For approval
I am not sure if it is showing mine? Mine is shorthaired, but doesn't seem to be uploading over the previous version. Darkhallows... Mew? 12:42, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

O.O. What happened to it! 12:53, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yours is showing up in the thumbnail of all of the past versions, but here it's showing a stretched version of the other person's image. This happened to me a couple of times with my own images uploading strangely, and I just waited a while and then uploaded again, so maybe try uploading again? 13:25, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

There it is ^^- Darkhallows... Mew? 11:51, September 12, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

Darken the shading. 16:25, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt A)-For approval
Gah finnaly anyways fith char-art im happy how he turned out :) comments?<font color="Violet">Mossleap <font color="Orange">You burnt my ice cream!!!  14:23, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good darken the pink ear a bit Maplepool 15:08, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and make his jaw crooked as on his apprentice image. 16:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I can see you based the eye on the warrior's eye. Use an apprentice tutorial to see what the eye should look like. You don't have to of course, but I think it looks a wee bit strange. 17:30, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink, and blur stripes. I don't think his jaw was crooked as an apprentice. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Give him a twisted jaw. Very nice though! ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 18:37, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby markings. 19:57, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED I did all that and i forgot about the crooked jaw XD so I put it in :)<font color="Violet">Mossleap <font color="Orange">You burnt my ice cream!!!  22:01, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

wha? its not showing my changes...<font color="Violet">Mossleap <font color="Orange">You burnt my ice cream!!!  22:03, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Give it time. It'll show. If not, reupload it. 03:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED its working :D anyways more suggenstions?<font color="Violet">Mossleap <font color="Orange">You burnt my ice cream!!!  15:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be blurred and make the ear-pink smaller. 15:30, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

His jaw needs to be bigger. Look at his apprentice/warrior images. 19:25, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink as well. 19:59, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Ki) (Alt) - For Approval
Sorry for my slight inactivity, marching band has gotten the better of me. I wasn't sure what the preferred way was to leave a new message without having it at the bottom of the page, so I just made one manually, but if I should do it differently let me know. Well, here's Blossomfall's alternate kit image. I had some troubles uploading it but now the changes are showing, so comments and suggestions? 15:20, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is over the limit. With Birchfall's image up, though it is in the wrong section. 15:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall's image may have been up first but Ice got her's up in the right section first. The point of the sections is to know how many images are up for approval. Images put up in the wrong section shouldn't count. Blur the shading and highlights. 16:13, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, thanks Ashshadow. :P I was confused about that. Define the stripe a tiny bit. 16:25, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, you got to defining the stripe before I could say reuploaded for blurring the shading and highlights. I'll get to the stripe in a bit. 16:32, September 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm having difficulties defining the stripe because of the way there's shading and part of a highlight on it. Suggestions? 17:07, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 19:58, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I do not know, Icethroat. What I would do, is I would just redraw the stripe, and blur it, then add highlights and the shading, and try to make it as equal as i can. :3 20:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

=Discussion Area= Use this area to post join requests, questions, and general discussion.

The links! Where are the links?
What happened to the links on the main page that listed the characters that needed art?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  11:30, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

To say so, I don't know. I just go to Nightfall's page and click on her charart section. :P 16:08, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Here's the link to Nightfall's. 18:32, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, that link does not have all up to date information... 22:28, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

That is true. 23:17, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'll try putting together a new list of them, as I have some free time before school starts. 22:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Rainwhisker! I'm a new person, and i am trying to join the charart society. the problem is- there arent many chararts left to be done! so when i saw nightfalls page i was excited- until i found out it was not up to date! if you can make a new page of chararts that need to be done- please post the link here as i would greatly appreciate it!!! Iceflower13 23:17, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is what I've got so far: Needed Charart List. It's not much, but if I'm missing any characters, you can leave a message on my talk page. I'll try and update it often. 23:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Rainwhisker, I believe Rabbitleap already has a kit charart. 18:17, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

thats the only charrie he has :-P Sunny  frost  21:36, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I've fixed it. 23:02, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and also, should Egg as a loner be on the list since the one on this page got declined? 01:34, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

heres some that are needed that aren't on Rainwhisker's page:

Leafstorm, Pikepaw, Dark Whiskers, Pouncetail (Alt. Apprentice), Brokenstar (Ki), Pebbleheart (W), Tawnypelt (Alt. Kit), and Whitethroat (Rogue) Sunny  frost  13:49, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sunnyfrost, there isn't really a need to post those up. Most of these images you have stated are up for approval (or reserved) 03:16, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sure Sunnyfrost was only trying to be helpful. But all of them are either on this page or reserved (though Pebbleheart, Pouncetail and Pikepaw have been on the reserved list for more than a month). 11:57, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Should I clean out the reservations table? I was always a little iffy about doing that, but it looks like it needs to be done. Darkhallows... Mew? 16:10, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

That would be just awesome, Shady. Please do. =) 23:30, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, just finished, I hope there wasn't any problems. There were a few things that needed to be done (Sunnyfrost was banned, one user was on twice) but I don't knoow how to delete sections. Darkhallows... Mew? 12:18, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Right-click on the section, and delete it. Is that right? 17:20, September 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Shady, assuming you mean the Current Projects, just delete the lines of code for that user. 17:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * I've deleted it, if that's okay. And my list was deleted, so I can't post any more characters there. Sorry! 01:03, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Help!
Nettlesplashes kit version up for approval is gone!! I made it and the whole article went away I even looked in the recently diclined and approved, Can someone help? ＩShadowandBlueＩ 18:17, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

I think it was declined because it was over the limit, that's what it said on the 2nd to last declined archive (?) 20:21, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

I put it up weeks ago and it was under the limit and it just went away yesterday. And I looked in the recent diclined and approved. ＩShadowandBlueＩ 20:38, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Huh? Look in Declined 32, Nettlesplash (Ki) is the third one. The comments said it was over the limit. It was declined weeks ago. 00:57, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. 03:04, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

No that was the 1st one that was over the limit we put another up at the appropreate time. And that ones gone. ＩShadowandBlueＩ 22:54, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure then. I think someone said about something that Nettlesplash's kit image is the only one there (for the article) so maybe it was approved but something is wrong with the photo adder, so they took it off until it is fixed? 23:03, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay so should I put a new article up when there is enough room? ＩShadowandBlueＩ 00:25, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

No, don't put up a new article. 22:49, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

No I mean a new message to get it approved. 14:41, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's been approved already...see Nettlesplash's page. 17:23, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Guess WHo's Coming Back!
Hey guys, I left for a reason: to work on my characters! I was thinking today that would come back. I want to do Graystripe's alt apprentice image. :3 Squirrel  Do You know... THE MUFFIN MAN!?!?!?!undefined 07:19, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

He doesn't need one...does he? 19:31, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Well, he was once described as solid gray, but I think that was just because they said "the gray apprentice..." or something along those lines. I mean, they're not going to describe him as gray with a darker gray stripe running down his back every time, are they? I don't think he needs one, and I also think it should be removed from his page, but this isn't PC, so it doesn't really matter :/ 19:33, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oblivion, his appearance for a long time with long-haired solid gray tom. So, I assume that would mean no markings such as a stripe? They didn't even mention th stripe until The Sight, so he was seen that way as a warrior too, I suppose. 05:12, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I really don't think it's necessary. We all know that the authors made a mistake, but it's not like he was described as gold or ginger. 17:26, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Oblivion and Moonflight. In my opinion, they probably didn't want to describe him every single time as "gray with a darker stripe down his back" or something along those lines, because it would be easier to just put gray or solid gray. But it's not up to me, it's for the leads to decide. 15:15, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Link
Hey people!

I was wondering, does anyone have the link that leads to the site that has the list of pages that need chararts? I'd love to get a reply 'cause I can't find it. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 23:11, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

I've created an official list that any of us can edit; right here. The link can be found on the main project page under the Progress & Directions section. -- 23:32, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

New Guidelines for Commenting
Hey guys. This is what popped into my mind just by glancing at one of the pending approval sections.


 * Do not post just to restate a comment. This creates clutter and long, long sections.
 * Compliments are great, but they cause clutter. Do not post just to say, "Great job!"
 * Exception:If there have been no constructive comments for 24 hours, it is permitted to say, "I see nothing wrong, wonderful job."


 * Do not post conversational comments; that is, comments with no constructive merit. This is not a chatting page, this is for solid, constructive criticism.
 * The artist is entitled to his/her opinion as well as others, and well-worded, polite debates are permitted. This may be about color, markings, or the formation/texture of the image.

Those are the immediate bullets that jumped into my head. If any of you disagree or have more ideas, please post here. I hope we all want to be operating at top efficiency. -- 23:22, September 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * These all look pretty good to me, if I think of anything else I'll let you know. 13:53, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Gtg
Well, I apparently can't be on this wiki till I'm 13, so I'll have to stop commenting till I do turn 13. See everybody in 3 months (moons, rather)! I'll miss this wiki. :( 16:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Bye, then. I, myself, think that is a stupid rule. Whats so great about being 13? I wish they'd get rid of the stupid rule <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:10, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

If have a problem with the rules, take it up with the admins. This is not the place to discuss this. 17:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * The rules are not this wiki's rules, but rather the rules of Wikia itself and are there for the protection of minors under child protection legislation. Lightmoon, I admire your maturity in accepting that rules are there for a reason and hope to see you back in a few months =) 17:25, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Aww, I know the rule can be a bit frustrating (I had to wait 2 years just to join!!!), but that's just how it is (Now, I'm 14) We'll miss you, Lightmoon! Earth  bender Tawny Style! 17:41, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Aww, I know the rule can be a bit frustrating (I had to wait 2 years just to join!!!), but that's just how it is (Now, I'm 14) We'll miss you, Lightmoon! Earth  bender Tawny Style! 17:41, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I echo Sandy in saying that it is wonderful you are accepting this so calmly. =) I hope to see you again in three months. -- 03:16, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

The rule is there because legally it needs to be :(, I know it used to annoy me. See you in a few months. Darkhallows... Mew? 11:49, September 12, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

I'd like to Join
hi!

id like to join charart! Thanxs, Scarletvixen

Welcome to the project! I've added you in as an apprentice. You can reserve a charart on this page and some apprentice tutirals can be found here. Also be sure to read the guidelines before posting a charart.-- 18:44, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Elder
Since I guess I'm returning I am no longer an elder. 火の毛皮 20:14, September 12, 2010 (UTC)