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Berrynose - Declined
Hi, this is my first entry! I hope you like it. I did it on corel painter essentials 4.-- Thornpath togehodou
 * I know Berrynose is cream, but it looks you just gave him a bunch of orange lines on a white background. Plus there needs to be shading and that means tons of that.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 04:32, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

The tail certainly needs fixing. Badly. The outline is also very thin. --Mal lin  ois  14:34, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

Update:Okay, I took some advice and added some shading. Also, I took someones advice and changed the coloring a bit. What do you think-- Thornpath togehodou 21:05, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

Can you please explain how the tail needs fixing?--Thornpath 20:07, 15 February 2009 (UTC)Thornpath

It doesn't. G B 57 20:31, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

I think the fur coloring is -extremely- well done! My only crit is that I think the eyes should appear more amber in colour; right now it looks a little black. --Melonlemon 02:46, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

Isn't Berrynose's nose supposed to be a stunning pink (via the name and Firestar's Quest)? -- MU MB LE 785  18:27, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

Um, well on these blanks it doesn't give you the choice to color in the nose.-- Thornpath togehodou 05:29, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

I know about the fox trap and how his tail died, but I mean use the short-haired blank's tail to make it shorter. --Mal lin ois  00:23, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

NOW it looks good. Just need to fix the blurred outline. --Mallinois The Puppy's Crib - Ui! 19:03, 21 February 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I did use the short haired blanks. Leafpool might not of cut it that short. And she bit it off when he still had kitten fur. His tail fur could of grown unnaturally.-- Thornpath togehodou 05:33, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

I really like it, but the lines on the throat are slightly colored brown.--Darkhallows 01:25, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

The needs to be more shading, and the tail is long haired while the body is short haired, which looks weird to me. I also find the stripes weird.They all end so adbruptly, and I think you need to blend them into the belly. Also, I think that they need to be blended into each other as well, because they look so unnatural. Either blur/blend the stripes, make wider, tabby stripes, or get rid of the stripes completely. Dawnfeather 06:27, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

Tail fur usually gets like that if the tail is missing (http://www.pictures-of-cats.org/images/japanese-bobtail-cat-picture.jpg) but yeah, the stripes could be blended more. --DarkHallows Lair 23:04, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Declined; gotta work on those images, people. G B 57 15:31, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Leader pixle - Declined


Hey, I have another leader pixle. Here it is. It's really simple. Just seeing if these will do. I also have a girl medicine cat somewhere. I'll put it up later. thanks guys! --MERLOCK 23:26, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the coding. They are alright, but there is really not much detail, not even whiskers. There will need to be long-hairs as well. The head is a little to small and the eyes look weird at that angle, especially on the female. --Darkhallows 05:38, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

First off, I don't think it's fair that you are doing this because Melonlemon is. About the image, these kind of look like Egyptian cat statues I would find in a museum. ZZ Top Get Your Wings  This House Is On Fire  12:14, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry if I crashed Melonlemon's party! Hee hee, I've had these made for about a month, or longer, and my parents had to think about me making an account, so I had them for a long time. But hey, do you need new pixels of the warriors? I can make some. (or attempt to. ;) --MERLOCK 13:32, 15 March 2009 (UTC)


 * You can have more than one up for approval from different users, but these look like egyptians and the canvas needs to be fixed. -- Mallinois F l u f f y i s W a t c h i n g 13:20, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Ya, I know, they do look funny. How do become an official member of project character art? Do I just ask and that's that, or does someone have to like approve? Thanks! --<font color="green" style="background:Black">MERLOCK( The Dragon Rider)  70px | <font color="Chocolate" style="background:green">Fantasy is real, who believes me?  19:48, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 05:13, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Mistyfoot - Declined
I know that I'm not technically a member yet, but I made Mistyfoot. (This is my first try. Criticism well appreciated) --<font color="BlueGreen" style="background:Black">Nightgaze  <font color="White" style="background:Blue">Iceberry’s Den 03:11, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

Not bad, I like her eyes a lot. But I would suggest using a more grey colour instead. Not to dark a grey though. The shadings good but you'll need it in more areas. And ad a pink for the ear. (they should really draw the outline of the inside of the ear. That would help all of us.-- Thornpath togehodou 05:27, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

The lineart seems messed up, it may be from saving it as gif.--Darkhallows 05:40, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

You don't have to be a member to make art, but Mistyfoot is a deputy, and we need more current pixels. Brambleclaw was a warrior when he was made, so he's really a deputy. -- <font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mallinois <font color="Lime" style="background:Black">F l u f f y i s W a t c h i n g 00:37, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

I think there needs to be a lot more shading. It seems to be a solid blue/grey colour, with a little bit of shading.

I don't think we need a deputy blank. But we do need medicine cats, leader, queen, and elder ones. Deputies are still warriors, but I guess you could say the same thing for leaders. Dawnfeather 02:24, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

I disagree Dawnfeather. If we're going to have seperate blanks for apprentices, kits, leaders, medicine cats, rogues, kittypets, elders (you get the picture...) then why not for deputies? As for this image - I agree that the colour is too blue and needs to be more cat-coloured. The shading also needs to be increased and worked into the pelt to look more natural also. --<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 18:52, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

You gotta point. I agree with everything written above. Dawnfeather 21:40, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

I think this should be declined, GB Dawnfeather  04:40, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Done. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 05:15, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Sedgekit- Declined
Had some free time, drew Sedgekit, feel free to judge it's bad T.T ..::Applestar4904 17:35, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Can it be zoomed in more? I can't tell anything about it (Other than the colour, sort of) when it's so small! Looks good though, i think Dawnfeather  05:04, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Dawnfeather, what do you mean "Zoom it in"? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 05:21, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Make it bigger? Dawnfeather 11:55, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

This is te size of the lineart though... Applestar4904 12:00, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Really? That's strange. Maybe make it larger using GIMP. Dawnfeather 22:39, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Actually, no. Don't worry about it. They just come out this small. Try putting more shading into the gray areas. Also put a little tiny bit of shading in the white areas. So cute! Dawnfeather  22:45, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

I would also suggest stronger shading. Darkhallows 21:34, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

I really hate to decline this, because it's beautiful, but this hasn't been worked on for a month. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 14:26, 2 May 2009 (UTC)