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Clovertail (Ro) ~ CBA
Chu changes showing? Anyways, Clovertail's rogue. It's ugly ;-; 12:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sweet! May be just my computer, but define the earpink and the shading on the back legs. This is great! 12:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:56, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights", or at least make them a little bigger, but it's your choice :3 *steals* 15:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 15:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the back of the paw darker than the front. 17:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

You should difine where the light is coming from, it looks like its coming from three places. 01:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, too~ Oh, and Bracken: shading placement is artist's choice :3 02:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry! I'll re-upload in a few minutes! 21:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading. 21:49, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the shading on the haunch and back, and define the eye depth a little. 23:37, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and tail shading  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 05:08, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the flank "highlight" bigger. Totally optional. 22:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded =3 00:23, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, your light source doesn't really make sense. There's a highlight on her back, as if the light was coming from above, but there's not one on her tail, and then there's one on her face as if the light was coming from the front. Choose a light source please. 15:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, Loonie? There's several images with quite similar shading up for approval right now... 06:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

o3o So, do I change it or...? 21:41, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

I would suggest changing it, 'cause Loonie is right...But, this light source is on many images. I still suggest changing it. 00:56, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'll re-upload when I get home from school =3 15:12, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:13, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on her stomach (or something xD) looks tinted gray, can you fix that? 16:46, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shading looks crappy... I think I should redo the shading... 17:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

waste all around the immaggee~ -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:49, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *fail* 20:03, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading now. ( 22:15, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:14, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well done, Leafy. CBA?

Clawface (Ro) ~ For Approval
I found a spot! Yay, first charart up in a while. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 23:03, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Are there scars? I can't quite tell. If not, add them. 8D 23:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Is there a light part along his back? If so, make it brighterr Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Take the earpink from his warrior (if you did, take it directly from the center). If you did that...then just disregard this x3 05:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   May the odds be ever in your favor 11:14, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could be my computer (I'll try looking at this from a different one later) but could you make the earpink a little more pink? Blur where the back highlight meets thhe shading to smooth it out. Nice job ^^ 13:06, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the scars pink to match his warrior? And what Ivyshell said. This is beautiful! 19:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 20:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scars brighter and maybe more red. They're kinda hard to see.... 21:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Nice. 11:28, 11, 04, 2012

Does it look a bit green to anyone else? It looks kind of green to me. 23:37, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

You're not the only one, Cinder. Not sure if it looks like that to any others, but could you (maybe) get rid of the (possible) green-ish tint? 08:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the color looks like the warrior but the warrior's shading is brown tinted so just make the shading a reddish brown color instead of black, keep the base coat the same. 15:40 Thu Apr 12

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  22:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm... blur the shading a tad. 23:05, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it any more. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  10:54, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars some more, they're very difficult to see  19:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the whole image a bit. 00:57, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  22:16, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 15:52 Sat Apr 21

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  16:12, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

He looks really yellow to me... Up the brown a little? 01:40, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:17, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars a bit. 20:26, 23, 04, 2012

Dodge (Ro)~ For Approval
\ My first charart. Comments? If the picture isnt showing, its here. ~Fallen 23:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nice for your first charart. ^^ Blur the body shading a bit and slightly define the stripes. 11:22, 11, 04, 2012

Define the stripes they are hard to see 12:18, April 11,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stripes defined and shading blurred more. Thanks, DJ :3 --~Fallen 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This is pretty for a first. Define the earpink at the tips? 22:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image has a yellow-green hue. Fix that? 23:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look yellow-green to me ._. 15:41 Thu Apr 12

I think it just looks yellow... Tone down the highlights(?) a bit. 00:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ear pink. I did`nt use any layers, so I darkened the main color. --~Fallen 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 01:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading, since I didnt have highlights, and blurred earpink a bit more. --~Fallen 03:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose a little bit. It looks a little neon to me :P 17:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think if you darken or make the base color less yellowish, this could be just about 80% done, in my opinion. 03:18, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Well, I don't know much about this but it's been over a week since Fallen's last upload, so I decided to take over. Comments? 04:48, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

According to my clock, it hasn't been over a week...A few more hours. 05:01, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wiki time for me is 5:02 05:07, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's been over a week, so this can stay. Lighten the earpink a bit to make it look less hot pinkish, there's waste under his belly, and I see a slash on his chest and his front leg farthest away from us, is that supposed to be there? And tone down the highlights a tad. 15:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think that slash thing maybe part of the stripes. Can you define the shading a little more? 15:53 Sat Apr 21

There is some waste in between the back left thigh and the under belly, Looks great! :3 -- 20:36, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the striping pattern. I might need to blur it some though :/ 15:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please do. They're too sharp-edged, imho.

Define the shading ;3 20:06, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a lot. And it looks like they're on top of the highlights. Darken and define the shading as well. 19:00, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. If you're using layers I would suggest putting the shading layer on top of the stripes layer. o3o 20:21, 23, 04, 2012  20:21, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know there's a lot of waste Dx please cdoment on something other than that, and I know the eyes and ears are missing too... I'll reupload soon this afternoon. 13:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's supposed to be named like Dodge.rogue.png So, basically, get rid of the extra .png =3 13:34, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but those don't look like stripes....try looking at the tutorials for stripe ideas.

Sharpclaw (SC) (Ro) - CBA
o.o Another rogue. I think this looks okay. Comments for improvement? :3 12:01, 11, 04, 2012

Aww, cute :3 Define the shading  12:12, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it a tad, too. 12:13, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome~ Add a couple more stripes and define the pale belly/chest. :3 12:32, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too hard, (bad at explaining) blur them a bit. 01:08, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  The stripes might need a bit more blurring still. 02:40, 13, 04, 2012

Can you maybe define the earpink a bit-- 17:09, April 13, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded -  Not much of a difference, but better? :/ 03:35, 14, 04, 2012

Make all of the tabby stripes more closely-packed (you can add more stripes, too) like on the other images. 06:24, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the hip joint looks a little funny. Could you lighten it so that the hip and the back merge together a little better? Breeze whisker  03:26, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Sorry for the late upload, it's been hard to take the time to do it. 08:46, 19, 04, 2012

Can you possibly darken the stripes and add some thin stripes in the blank areas? This is beautiful DJ <3333 05:12 Sat Apr 21

''Reuploaded - ' Thanks Mounty. I don't want to add too many stripes otherwise it wouldn't match. :/ 02:22, 22, 04, 2012

Actually, I think that you should add more stripes as Mounty suggested. I don't think it matches the other images this way...owo 04:53, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the paler belly? And I think he should have a paler chest and paws too. 18:59, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  owo, now that you mention it, your right Stoney. And yes Misty, you are correct, but he already had a pale chest so I just defined it. These stripes are doing my head in! 08:37, 23, 04, 2012

CBA? 15:21, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments for Improvement? 23:20, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the highlights/shading so the white stands out? The entire pelt seems gray.

Like that? Changes may not be showing though. 23:29, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful! :3 There are a few areas of shading that you may want to blur (Around the belly area and around the shoulder) 11:42, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole image a tad. It still looks gray 11:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the scars. 17:59, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

D'awwww, I wanted this one Dx Darken the eye color a tiny bit, unless you took it from the leader '-' 21:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

And I think he needs a longer tail. 21:55, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No he doesn't. Only cats like Tallstar, where it's a prominent feature, will get longer tails. 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 20:23, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define and smooth out the shading. 06:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleh, his leader image was tweaked to have a longer tail. 00:30, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

...... It was? e.e *facepalm* It shouldn't have been..... we discussed that before.... *sigh* Well if his leader image has it, I guess it should match... 02:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

So I make the tail longer? 16:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading too? 19:32, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink a little bit, and define the shding on the back leg farthest away from us. 19:42, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading, and smudge the pelt up into the earpink. This is pretty! 03:08, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded DX this is terrible. 20:14, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww... Cinder, this is awesome! White cats are hard, don't insult your art. Blur the shading more, and define the shading on the backs of his legs (if any) and preference but to give it a bit more realistic touch, smudge up where the black meets teh white and then blur. Nice work ^^ 03:08, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the other images, so please don't smudge the black.

Awww! This looks wonderful, Maybe make the scars and earpink a bit less neon. -- 22:57, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thank you all for your kind words ^^ 00:14, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and try to make the scars longer and sharper. 02:46, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 05:17 Sun Apr 22

blur the shading on his back -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  13:10, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle (Ro) ~ Declined
It feels awesome to have another charart up for approval. ♥ Comments? . 06:14, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

8D Thistly~! You're finally uploading again<3 Define the shading on the legs and tail~ 08:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded . 08:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistly<333 Define the earpink a bit. I love this<3 10:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistley <3333 8D. Smudge the stripes a tad more? Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 12:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

This is so much btter than mine <3 Define the earpink. 15:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thansks guys. :) Re-Uploaded . 17:45, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Do you think you can make it match the older rogue a tad more? Just a tiny bit? But that's your choice. 19:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I will have to say no, sorry, As the aritst this was just my way of trying to making it mine, as yours was to you. :3 . 21:28, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Very good Thistley! Define/sharpen the stripes a bit, and make the earpink color match the elder image. 02:42, 14, 04, 2012

Nicely done. Darken the shading some more. 06:20, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Well I was actually wanting to ask if the elders' earpink could be tweaked...because it's sort of an un-natural color. And Re-uploaded. . 22:09, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading. (If you do nominate it, I can do it because I have the .xcf/.pxd file.)  11:40, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Dang, forgot this. I'll Re-upload later today or early tomorrow~! . 17:55, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, are you going to re-upload? It's been 10 days... o3o 13:37, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Sorry, Thistle. =(

Crouchpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Well, TheBoss2 lost their reservation, so I decided to take it up. o3o Comments? 12:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black so we can see the lineart and make the highlights contour more naturally to his body. 13:16, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

And make the earpink a bit more pink 17:33, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink tooo~  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 19:34, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made the highlights too bright in contrast to the rest of the body...;.; 22:59, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and define the earpink a tad. 03:21, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:11, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. :3 10:52, 18, 04, 2012

Reuploaded~ 13:32, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 14:31, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 09:51, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink some. C: Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:44, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (Ro) - CBA
As far as I know, this was declined before and nobody else reserved it/got it approved, and I needed a charart to do~ :3 Comments~? ouo 22:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. 23:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Make the earpink more pink. 14:47, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken it just a tad? :3 19:19, 04 16, 2012

Blur the shading on the haunch and tail C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 19:22, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this... 03:12, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 03:32, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gimp always spazzes on me when I do black cats, so sorry if it's messed up. 03:50, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink? c: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 05:48, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. ^^  14:57, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some? It might just be me, but they seem a tad blotchy. :/ <span style="">10:47, 18, 04, 2012

Reuploaded No, the highlights are like that. >.< Blurred them. 15:42, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define/Darken the shading. 15:53, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. 20:20, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a bit?-- 23:10, April 18, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Hmm. The earpink looks fine to me. 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading/highlights or both. :3 <span style="">08:35, 19, 04, 2012

Reuploaded Gah blotchy highlights, why you haunt me??!! Defined the highlights. >.<  18:14, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Since it's been over 24 hours, I'mma go ahead and CBA this. Okay? :3 03:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt, but can you blur the highlights some? O.o <span style="">08:14, 23, 04, 2012


 * Wait I worded that wrong. Blur the highlights as they seem to be somewhat blotchy (although it may just be me) and then define them so you can see them more. O.O Sorry about that. >.< <span style="">08:42, 23, 04, 2012

They're fine. Continuing CBA.

Vixenkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Yep here she is. I made her eyes orange because I always thought she was an orange/gray cat. Anyway, comments? 01:59, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, if there is any. 02:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:09, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Try adding a highlight to the chest, perhaps? If you don't use them, that's fine. However, they're pretty useful on black cats, who can be a pain in the tush to shade.

Reuploaded I added highlights. 13:26, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose dark grey/black? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:52, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

define the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  06:59, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Grasskit (Ki) - CBA
Alright, let's just say that if you tell me to change the pattern or colors, I'm going to be on the reluctant side since this is modled after my cat Nibbles, and the colors were colorpicked off a photo of him, so you gotta give me a good reason why the pattern and/or colors are unacceptable. Oh, and two more things: "Awwwwwwww" <3 and any comments for improvement? 23:09, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 23:15, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think you need to rename the file as File:Grasskit (CP).kit.png. 23:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Three things: Yeppers^ Define the shading. and d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww <3 <steals image and runs away again>

Also, there's some waste under the tail. 23:37, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge or blur the stripes a tad. Nibbles!!! <3 00:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and I also tinted the shading slightly so that it helps bring out his color :)  13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste o3o Tail tip and under back foot. 00:21, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste near the tip of the tail too. 11:29, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Silver, I already said that ._. Try not to repeat things. 11:58, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. Cute! <span style="">02:02, 22, 04, 2012

Reuploaded  01:26, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I love this so much <33 CBA? 04:58 Tue Apr 24

Bluestar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
She was decipted as a gray she cat with thin fur in Secrets of The Clans. Comments? 03:46, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular and blur it a lot. Darken and define the shading as well.

Reuploaded Toned down earpink 03:53, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

If it's thin fur, shouldn't it be shorthaired? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  04:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I would think so...

You need to have a cite for this description in the trivia on Bluestar's page before you can make this. And there must be no question as to whether or not the cat in the image is Bluestar. In any case, if memory serves, most of the images in that book were grayscale anyway, and most didn't have captions explaining which cat was which. Declining unless you can provide the citation. 04:41, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it wasn't a picture. Snowfur said something about her sister having thin gray fur in that story about Mosskit. Secrets of the clans, Page 77. No pictures, it specifically said she had thin gray fur. 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

And I put a cite on the page before I made this. 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

The cite was verified before she even had the image reserved. I checked myself. Changing heading back to "For Approval", since it was talking about Bluefur, and it had nothing to do with a picture.

Blur the earpink, and make it less orange/reddish. 19:59, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:31, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still blur the earpink. 10:20, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:35, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Nice Ivy <span style="">08:12, 23, 04, 2012

I don't know if it's just me but it seems that where the shading meets the highlights it looks blotchy. Blur it a bit please, unless anyone disagrees. 02:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Ro) ~ For Approval
x.x Alright. So, I tried to match her as well as I could to her kittypet image, I hope I named the file and headline right, sorry if I didn't. Criticism welcome! :3 05:14, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Realized I made her to creamyish so I made her a bit pinker like her kittypet image. And I added/tweaked a few things. -- 05:28, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a lot. Nice job Raven~ 07:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Beautiful!-- 10:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

You named it wrong, please renamed it Violet.rogue.png and usually when you take over a project you take over their spot, you don't start a new one but its fine for now. 12:01, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and lighten the stripes a tad. And renamed the heading "Violet (Ro) ~ For Approval" Good job. 12:04, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Wild, you don't always have to take over another user's spot. I just forgot to archive the old one because I was tired last night and never did it before I went to sleep.

Make the earpink a little more red. Lovely~ o3o 14:06, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Made the earpink redder, renamed the file, blurred the shading, lightened the stripes a tad, smudged the stripes. Hope it looks better! -- 18:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded just tried to match her earpink color and pelt color more to her kittypet image. -- 19:04, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

waste around the image~ -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:43, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shouldn't be anymore waste. -- 20:22, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry. I didn't see that trivia point when I looked. 02:28, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Huh, Shelly? Blur the shading along the back the tinniest tiniest bit ever~ It can be your choice, though =3 02:49, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Y'know, it could be my computer, but the earpink looks like it doesn't fill up the whole ear on the left side. Also, define it a little (make it more pink) 02:54, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the earpink color should be fixed. -- 19:37, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little neon. Could you tone it down? o3o <span style="">17:26, 22, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Toned the earpink down :3 -- 19:09, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and round out the shoulder shading. Breeze whisker  19:56, April 22, 2012 (UTC)\

Re-uploaded -- 20:01, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

I see waste all around it. o3o 20:09, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Though I think it's just my computer -.- 20:15, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry! I forgot to get rid of it. -- 01:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Add white to the chest. 04:54, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added white to the chest. -- 12:48, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Attention Ok. So I woke up to find my lap top would Not Turn On. It still isn't working, so It might have to be sent in, and so they normally whipe the computer.. So that means I basically lost the .xcf file for Violet.. I Really hope it looks good enough to be approved. Really sorry. -- 01:47, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. After being 99% sure we would have to send my lap top in, it turned on, and I emailed myself the .xcf, so the .xcf is Not gone. -- 19:54, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Boulder was shown as a solid light gray tom on pg. 76 of The Rise of Scourge. Comments for improvement? 13:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink and enlarge the earpink as well. Also rename this  13:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploded Also, why don't you rename it. I don't know how. 13:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Because she's not an admin. It's not that difficult. Go into whatever program you use, choose "Save AS", and name it "Boulder.warrior.alt.png" and when you upload it to the Wiki, it will be named that. 13:50, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Sort of) just renamed the file with a new image. 13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. 14:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smooth it out so it's not so blotchy. 18:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes might not be showing. 19:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink more. 20:21, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. <span style="">02:21, 21, 04, 2012

Also blur the earpink. 20:55, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. It might be just me, but it looks like they're rectangle-y. Spark Love me some chocolate~! ♥ 22:02, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really hate blurring. 16:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. <span style="">20:23, 23, 04, 2012 20:23, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading? c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:53, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still really hate blurring. 19:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) - CBA
Birdie's got declined. Comments? 02:29, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a tad. 02:47, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:49, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 11:27, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  20:11, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:56, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. <3 22:08, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the overall base color a bit. Lovely Scarlet! <span style="">08:08, 23, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded 22:33, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

CBA! Uppa! 04:55 Tue Apr 24

I'm so sorry for interuppting the CBA Scarlet D:. But I see waste along the back/tail and near her face. 11:24, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Waste doesn't effect the quality of the image. I'll continue the CBA. 17:16 Tue Apr 24

Leafstar (Ro) - For Approval
Taking five days to do this like a boss. 19:01, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Rawr, I wanted to this >:< But I love it! <33 Define the earpink and I think you may be missing some stripes on the stomach, but not sure. 20:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Ro) ~ For Approval
Figured I should post him now lol. Woohoo I've done two of his images now! Yay? I'll never understand to method of shading on this, it seems like all highlights and no shading o3o I must have had zero sanity as an apprentice x.x Comments? 01:18 Tue Apr 24

Hold on. When did we come to a consensus that DF characters get a rogue pixil? (I can see the logic but I don't remember ever coming to an agreement) 01:22, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather has one. Therefore they should all get one. 01:29, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

But where have we actually come to a conclusion that every DF cat would get one? Because if it hasn't been stated anywhere and made sure that everyone agrees to it, none should be reserved or up for approval. 01:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

No, nobody has commented on the darn discussion in ages. >.> But if we agree that Redwillow should get one for turning against his Clan, all of them should get one too with that logic. 04:33, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Snowtuft (Ro) ~ For Approval
Sparrowfeather's main image is a rogue image, so Snowtuft gets one as well.

Smudge the scar sideways to match the warrior. 02:14, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

If they're getting rogue images, I don't think it matters. Sparrowfeather no longer has a warrior image on her article, so neither would Snowtuft.

Perhaps make the scar a tad thinner? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  02:57, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Redwillow (Ro) ~ For Approval
So we're doing this? (shrugs) Comments? 02:02, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mottles. =P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  03:00, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Silverhawk (Ro) ~ For Approval
Woo~ Since we're doing the dark forest residents as rogues...I guess he should have one. Eh, I did a bad job on this image. >.< Comments for Improvement? 05:17, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Needs to be ragged  05:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

The color and the pattern seem to be a little off. I can email you the .xcf file of his warrior image if you want? c: 20:22, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Antpelt (Ro) ~ For Approval
Since we are redoing the Dark Forest cats as rogues, I chose Antpelt. Any comments for improvements? 11:04, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

sharpen the scars and thin them out a little bit -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:59, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  14:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing (Ro) ~ Declined
'Teldy told me that she does get a rogue images, so here she is! Comments for improvement? 19:06, April 24, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Um, I don't know where Atelda's getting this information from, but Icewing most definitely does not get a rogue image. We've agreed that only the cats who have betrayed their Clan by going against it get one. Icewing was unaware of the intentions of the Dark Forest cats; she thought she was doing it for the good of her Clan. Doesn't sound like a rogue to me. Declining this and anyone who disagrees, feel free to speak up. Loonie 19:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. Icewing was against the DF before the battle even began. She shouldn't get a rogue image. Only those cats that we know sided with the DF. 19:14, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

This is what she said Atelda: Oh, wait, yes. Nevermind, I wasn't aware that we'd agree to that but then yes, Clan cats who went to the DFs get rogue chararts.-- 20:19, April 24, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

No, Icewing doesn't get one. She was being manipulated by the DF cats into thinking she was helping the Clans. The same could be said for Beetlewhisker and Ivypool. She doesn't get one. The rogue thing is for those who were actually part of the Dark Forest, like Snowtuft, Redwillow and Antpelt.