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Clovertail (R) ~ Tweaked
OA was Leafu. Tweaked to make the brown less golden and whiten the white. Comments? Bbun (talk) 23:46, January 30, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

make the brown a bit lighter, she's light brown 23:48, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-upped. Bbun (talk) 00:03, January 31, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Can you possibly lighten her a bit more? Maybe like Robinwing's colour? 03:24, 31, 01, 2013

Mounty, she's the same brown as the queen. Bbun (talk) 19:11, January 31, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

I believe she's aware of that. ._. It's too dark for light brown, imho.

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 19:50, January 31, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

See Berry's comment on the queen. They're kinda tawny-ish..or at least I think so.

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 01:39, February 2, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

This isn't light brown, it's light pink... 05:16, February 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried making her more brown ;_;. Changes are here. Bbun (talk) 15:13, February 2, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Saturate her a touch. 17:58, February 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like her better 8D. Bbun (talk) 18:09, February 2, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading a lot. 05:11, February 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oh derp, I forgot xD. Bbun (talk) 16:28, February 3, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Lighten the white more. 17:53, February 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 18:13, February 3, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Little more and define the shading on it. 00:45, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried okay. 19:56, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Still gray... 21:54, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's the shading that's making the white gray, so I lightened it a bit. Bbun (talk) 01:21, February 5, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

The shading on the white is extremely flat. Define it.

Re-uploaded. I tried. Bbun (talk) 01:35, February 5, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Define doesn't mean darken. It means make it more visible. Try erasing some of the shading on the legs and then blurring it. It's still very flat, and making the white even darker than before.

Mudfur (Alt MC) - Tweaked
Tweaked for the shading depth. OA is me with a tweak by me. Comments? The image that made me a warrior. ;-;  02:56, February 1, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad, and thin it out on the paws. 11:19, February 1, 2013 (UTC)

There's a lot of waste around him. Remove that please? Bbun (talk) 19:30, February 1, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Poolcloud (E) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be smudged a little more, plus I redid the shading because it was icky. 15:26, February 1, 2013 (UTC)

White be looking really gray. ouo

Define the earpink, maybe? 22:15, February 1, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Didn't touch the earpink cos it's the same as the others, and it doesn't need to be super visible anyway. 00:10, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt A3) ~ Tweaked
OA was Shelly, and she needed to be lightened up a bit. So, comments? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 17:02, February 2, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could lighten the top of her head? 17:57, February 2, 2013 (UTC)

She also needs to be a bit more saturated, specifically on her shading mostly. 18:11, February 2, 2013 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (A) - Tweaked
OA was me and stripes needed to match. I had a little difficulty getting the furry pattern of the stripes to match but I tried, I promise XD I just wanted to work on this since it's been sitting for a while  04:47, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the base/brighten the highlights. Add some thinner stripes, add a stripe between the haunch and belly, and smudge the stripes a bit more and make them less blurred. 21:58, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (KP) ~ Tweaked
OA be me. Tweaked the colors and stuffs again. They're all the same as the warrior.

Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
OA was Yurt. Had multiple issues. I got the pattern from looking at Brightsky's older image, and I really liked how the ginger was placed. Comments? ouo

Re-uploaded. Paleh told me the color I had for the eyes wasn't quite natural, so I fixed that.