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Snowdrop (Kittypet) - Declined
i like to shade white cats Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 20:35, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Very pretty! :D Can you define the light on ---> ear? 20:40, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:45, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

add shading depth?

Still working? 23:36, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, I'm gonna re-up tonight <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups an attempt was made <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Where is your light source? <span style="">1:37 Mon Mar 4 2019

Looks like its coming from --> side Malina457 (talk) 02:04, March 5, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Can you define the light on the legs 17:01, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:21, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I have this ready I've just forgotten to re-up it my focus has gone to trying to get waspwhisker white right aaah I'll re-up it when I'm on my pc <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:01, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reups + shading fixes so <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:48, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth th3 shading some? 00:15, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think it looks pretty smooth....maybe just a tiny bit more. Could you define the light on the collar? 19:22, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

I honestly think the shading's smooth enough and doesn't need to be tweaked at all. ​​

define the shading depth <span style="">12:05, 3/14/2019

Still working?

I already tried defining the depth earlier and honestly this was the best I could do, and it seems fine to me. Sorry if I sound rude here but I would just like one more opinion and if it's agreeing, then I'll try. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:21, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think it looks okay 12:42, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

I thought she had green eyes... -- John made it. He’s the only one. Rest of us… no.  But… I tried. In the end. I did.  22:47, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

She should, yeah. 00:46, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

I’m sorry but declined due to lack of work. 05:02, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

Elder blanks - CBA
aaa ty all so much!!!! Whiskii ✿ 02:49, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe that the heads are just very slightly too big (from reference images, it seems like a cats body is around 2 (2/3) heads) 03:02, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the nose bridge a bit - like this. 12:22, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. with the way the <-- whiskera are pointed would the --> left ones show? I adore these 12:30, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Might be my personal problem but could you make the smile a little less connected to the whiskers/less...noticeable? I love a smile and a small one is cute but this one seems overly large for a cat. Idk. These are really good though! 19:39, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with what winter said about the smile– i also think it would be more in character if it were lessened 03:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hows this look? blanks are hard!! Whiskii ✿

hm, it still looks as though the whiskers/mouth are touching maybe curve the mouth down a tad instead of up? 15:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Are changes showing?

last nitpick– the long hair tail's seems to lie unnaturally flat, could you maybe add more fur lines there? i love these so much 15:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is optional; but maybe since they are elders add little lines under their eyes to make them seem older?

15:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mind checking for a few darker gray lineart pixels that aren't quite black? There's a few scattered around on it

i think wiki's having a problem rn or somethin because the changes arent showing, ill get to theother comments in a sec  Whiskii  ✿ 16:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded are the changes finally showing? also i tried putting a line under their eyes but it blended too much with the whiskers. i may still add it if you really want to  Whiskii  ✿ 17:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the blanks could benefit from a line under the eyes - just to make them look older. 18:07, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I also just wanted to point out the longhair's tail is like that because its supposed to be flat on the ground ^-^  Whiskii  ✿ 18:40, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I mean they look fine without the line imo 20:27, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed; the line might make it too crowded. 22:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tried something out, thoughts? Whiskii ✿ 22:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I think these look great! 02:25, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Personally I think the lines around the eyes (both on the left side and near the snout) should be removed. Cats don't really have any sort of creasing in those two spots no matter what age, so it doesn't make much sense for them to be there. The shoulders are also too defined, especially on the longhair, and the tail curve is a bit unnatural right now. Also, I don't have the time to draw a test lineart tweak to check, but have you made sure that the haunch area looks good when the tail is removed? Cause that was a slight problem on the old versions, and even on the kit blanks I had to completely redo the haunch after I realized it looked weird when they were used for a short-tailed/tailless character. If you've already checked and made sure it looks fine like that, you can ignore this bit of the comment.

reuploaded removed the eye lines, made the shorthair's tail better, kept the longhair's tail as is, because i cant really do much else with it, removed most of the shoulder line. also the haunch area looks fine when tail is removed, you just have to draw it in correctly  Whiskii  ✿

changes arent showing on the shorthair :(  Whiskii  ✿

reuploaded there was waste around the image? o.O also i think its working now! changes are showing! Whiskii ✿ 15:09, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

now the changes for the waste arent showing -.-  Whiskii  ✿ 15:10, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hopefully this fixes it  Whiskii  ✿ 23:13, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure but on the shorthair, I think the ears need to be brought forward so the neck curves naturally into the head - something like this?  16:13, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

I looked at some images of cats in this position and their backs appear more arched and their shoulders are not really visible;, , as a reference. Could you also make the body longer? They look a bit short right now. 20:17, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna give a redline on this when I get some more free time later, but I did wanna point out that it's not clear if this pose is supposed to be the kind of bunched up pose that patch linked, or a more relaxed pancake-y pose like this. Either way the spine is two short right now, but whether you lengthen the entire body a lot and keep the arch roughly the same or lengthen it just a bit and make the arch much more pronounced, that's kinda up to your interpretation of the pose (though yes, please do remove the shoulder lines, they're not visible in either case).

reuploaded i think the wiki is being weird again! sorry for lack of uploads my life has been super busy lately! Whiskii ✿ 20:57, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, the wiki's being really weird lately. So could you provide a link for the changes? Unfortunately, I can't see them. c: 16:08, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the changes on my screen :P here's a screenshot <span style="">16:10, 3/13/2019

Thank you! I still believe that the ears on the shorthair need to be brought forward so the neck curves naturally into the head -  like this?  18:27, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

I'd really rather not, i already moved the ears forward  Whiskii  ✿ 19:24, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think they could be moved forward, just like 3 pixels or so? <span style="l">19:42, 03/13/2019

Also, on the shorthair, could you make it so the back is flatter, it seems to dip down a tad far. 18:41, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hows this?? ^-^ i think they look so much better now! also yay changes are showing!

as for the ears, i tried it out three pixels forward but they did not look good, so i ended up moving it 1.5 pixels  Whiskii  ✿ 13:39, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

Probably gonna get shot for this, but comments before approval for these? I love these and the improvements make these blanks look so much better.

Pale Minor She-cat - For Approval
My first attempt at a charart on here, so I hope I've done it right! 03:37, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome job! Define the shading/add more all over. If you can, define the earpink a little bit. 03:46, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the tail shading and define the eye color? It just seems white to me. 04:10, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Unfortunately, the wiki seems to dull all the colouration, and I can't quite figure out how to fix that. 04:29, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

While the shading is gorgeous, where is your lightsource coming from? I'm thinking from above, but some areas are lacking shading that would otherwise confirm this (I'm upgrading you to an apprentice btw keep up the good work :D ) 20:01, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pink is still hard to tell what color it is, would you mind darkening it by a few shades? 22:04, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redefined the shading to match the more general shading idea of the blank while still keeping the additions for body definition, and tried to darken up the ear pink as much as possible. 07:43, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Also when you re-upload, try doing it under the same name so there isn't so many ^-^ but heres a redline. The red is basically where the general shading should be, the blue is the light, and the purple was where I beleived the shading should be smooth. 03:40, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't quite how I imagine the light source, as I imagine a sun setting toward the 'camera', but definitely will take that into mind! I was having to use new images as unfortunately the changes wouldn't show unless I did. I can try and just replace the images instead? 04:54, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

I was primarily going off what I saw. Currently, you could try uploading it under tge same one and using imgur for the changes. 05:20, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading more? disregard if this has been said after your previous upload <span style="">12:09, 3/14/2019

Still working? 20:00, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Snowstar (Le) ~ For Approval
here is a son, I tried to match the StarClan as best as I could 03:25, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

define shading on the face? <span style="">12:15, 3/14/2019

Think there's some leaking shading on the front limbs and belly shading. 18:32, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the StarClan image is a tad bit lighter than what you have here. Not a lot, but maybe a couple of shades.

I colored picked from the star, although it was hars with the highlights and shading covering most of it. I'll try and it some though. 21:29, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe try using highlights to match the image in brightness, it might help a little? 23:33 Thu Mar 14 2019

is it just me, or dose it look like the earpink is on the ear, out of where the earpink should be? Axolotls are my children!  01:33, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Earpink is fine. --

08:36, 3/15/2019

The circle created by the tail should not be filled in. 18:38, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

it does look like there is a tiny bit of earpink waste on our left side's cheek above the eye. <span style="">19:03 Fri Mar 15

That's shading, I used red. Its the same as my other leader images. 20:39, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna be the unpopular one here, but the tint really throws the color off and makes it seem like it doesn't match the StarClan image. Also, not sure what you do or don't plan on doing, but Max's suggestion of using highlights might work out for matching the color better. ​​​

Re-Ups, let me know if the changes don't show but they seem to be showing. I added highlights, a bit more shading to the face, and smoothed the shading a lot. I also got rid of that tail waste. 09:26, March 18, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the ears? 12:50, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's not really any shading on the left one and the right one is in the shadow. Could I get a second? I can try and define it. 01:04, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

I think the depth could be defined. It all being in shadow doesn't mean there wouldn't be some depth to it. Plus, ears aren't flat objects; there'd be at least some depth in <- ear anyways due to it being a 3D object.

Sasha (Alt KP) - CBA
i think since the bluestar was removed im ok to do this? 23:29, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading just a smidge, possibly? The depth is fine, but that's all I can really see right now - also this should be named File:Sasha.kittypet.alt.png :D) 23:42 Thu Mar 14 2019

Oof sorry! Re-Uploaded! 21:01, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

do you mind smudging the ends where the toes meet the dark brown socks? it just looks too defined <span style="">09:48, 3/16/2019

Re-Uploaded! 14:09, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the lower chest and the bottom of <--- front leg where it meets the chest. And perhaps add some more shading to ---> portion of the belly behind the <--- front leg? 21:18, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 18:39, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Velvet (SD) (KP)~ CBA
--

06:29, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading along the tail? 18:36, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

could you add a bit of depth to the neck shading? <span style="">19:02 Fri Mar 15

with your lightsource the entire tummy needs to be in shading. also can you smooth the shading on the flank & legs some? <span style="">09:50, 3/16/2019

Withdrawing just... no. anyone can take over. --

02:39, 3/17/2019

i can take over! <span style="">03:44 Sun Mar 17

reuploaded! i'll add depth to the shading tomorrow, tired <span style="">04:29 Sun Mar 17

reuploaded ok cool <span style="">00:57 Mon Mar 18

Smooth out the shading on the hip/back, and I think there's some leaking shading on the very top of the shoulder. 12:21, March 18, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">23:32 Mon Mar 18

Maybe lighten the shading a few ticks? It looks really dark and strong right now. But good work! :) 05:26, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you :) <span style="">15:44 Tue Mar 19

CBA? 22:32, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

SD Mid-colored kittypet (KP) - For Approval
I hate solids <span style="">16:59, 03/15/2019

smooth shading a tad more on the tail? <span style="">09:49, 3/16/2019

Still working? 04:27, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

reup <span style="">15:29, 03/20/2019

Shnuky (KP) ~ For Approval
she's back

Maybe you could darken the shading color just a tiny bit? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  00:45, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Patch (RF) (KP) - For Approval
Since the entire set is getting remade, I switched the pattern. If I need to do it in the original one, let me know. All the colors are the same, though. <span style="">17:46 Sun Mar 17

So cool! Can you smooth out the edges of the shading a tiny bit? 19:58, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Growler (KP) - For Approval
Joke's on me, I don't remember for the life of me how I smudged the rogue. If the changes aren't showing, use this for now. ​​

Could be just me but i can barely see the shading on the black parts. -- 12:53, 3/18/2019

Re-uploaded. I fiddled with the darkness, but I doubt that's helping. I had this issue with the rogue too, because of how the pattern is. If it's that bad, I'll consider tweaking the pattern overall and nominate the rogue. ​​

Re-uploaded. As per requested for the back black foot. ​​

hm could you maybe lighten the shading/smooth it out? 15:41, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. idk. ​​

The black placement on the haunch isn't making the shading show up well. -- 02:19, 3/20/2019

Re-uploaded. This pattern is demonic.

TS-3 (Lo) - CBA
take 2. still not sure if she should be a queen or not. i don't have a copy of TS 3 on me so I'm going based off the information the minor characters' page 05:27, March 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:28, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

Gray she-cat (KP) ~ CBA
No clue if I named this right or if I did the shading properly :D 02:15, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is good! Add some more to <--- ear and on ---> side of the haunch (right next to the belly fluff). 02:37, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

You can only have one new image at a time. Please pick either this or the black Dark Forest cat. ​​​

Reuploaded Sorry, Jayce 05:13, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:28, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

Black tom (DF) ~ CBA
I just counted the number of the Dark Forest cats listed there for the name... Gosh I hate naming these. Also, the mouth on this blank confuses me :/ 02:30, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste between the chin and --> front leg, and can you define the earpink? 02:36, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

You can only have one new image at a time. Please pick either this or the gray kittypet. ​​​​

Withdrawn I thought the rule of being allowed two if you're doing a KP/leader was still active, sorry :( 05:10, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

It is, but those are for redone kittypets, not brand-new images. Kittypets that needed their images redone are allowed two at a time, not something from the minor characters page and whatnot. ​​​

Am i able to take over? I'm not sure if Talon's alt is a redo but may i? --

11:37, 3/19/2019

Yes you are free to take over. ^^ 12:46, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Vec ^^ -- 12:55, 3/19/2019

Reups please guys don't talk about the shading unless it's quite needed. my shading style changed to be more rougher, just a heads up. -- 13:24, 3/19/2019

Hate to be that one but can you smooth it the tiniest bit? 01:06, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reups -- 02:38, 3/20/2019

CBA? 22:34, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

Tabby (DF) ~ CBA
Never know what to name these. The one b/w the tortoiseshell and ginger/black tabby. And not entirely sure what I was going with this one. 02:35, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

holy crap this is good. can you slightly smooth out the shading on the shoulder? 15:40, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Thanks! 23:22, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 22:34, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

Henry (KP) - For Approval
A soft boy, tried light source from below. Image is here if the old one is still showing up. 23:54, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

this is so cute ^^ could you define shading at the head more? if the light source is coming from below there should be some darkness on the top of his face like what you have on his body? -- 02:35, 3/20/2019

reup also got rid of some waste  03:00, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

She cat with silver and black patches ~ For Approval
my interpretation of the description.. can remove those stripes if need be, though I'd probably have to redo the whole thing.

would you mind darkening the base a few shades? she looks white <span style="">15:31, 03/20/2019

Re-uploaded did i darken it too much?

It might just be me but she looks more gray than silver 23:40, March 20, 2019 (UTC)