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Splashnose ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? I'm adding in some quotes in a bit, so don't worry. xD 03:32, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think quotes are really the only things you need. :) 04:10, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Added the quotes! Comments? 08:39, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

If it can't be expanded, I think it looks good! 17:56, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

But can it be expanded? 16:34, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. I went over her presence in Code of the Clans and added things in. Nothing else can be added. 20:41, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great, Rainey! It'll probably be on the To-be-CBVed list if no one has any objections. 01:13, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! =) 23:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. 15:53, July 10, 2011 (UTC)CB

CBV? 16:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all I could expand, and added some quotes. Comments? 18:13, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks Good! Can you expand Into the Wild, Forest of Secrets and Midnight. Also, find a ref for Squirrelflight being his mate if possible. 20:23, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

I can't expand Into the Wild or Forest of Secrets anymore due to the fact that he only shows up once on Into the Wild, and there, too, he doesn't do anything. In Forest of Secrets, he isn't even mentioned. I expanded Midnight a bit more, but it's not possible to expand that anymore. But I found the citation! Anything else? 21:33, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Shoot! I'll have to temporarily close this too. I forgot the voting counts. Please don't take this from me. 23:24, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I won't archive this. Can Night Whispers be expanded? 16:37, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Night Whispers can't be expanded anymore as he was only mentioned once in the whole book. But I expanded Sign of the Moon some more. 00:26, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Your other nominations are closed, so now you can officially do this one. 18:30, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I can. Comments? 20:32, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand more of the NP serie? And is Ashfur seen at all before the fire in Long Shadows? So far it looks good! 22:56, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

I tried to expand the NP series, but he doesn't even show up a bunch of times, so there's nothing I can do there. I did add in parts before the fire in Long Shadows, though. Anything else? 02:14, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

The Dark River section could use a little flow, otherwise brilliant job SquirrelFlame! 01:20, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Right, I'll put in some transitional words here and there. Thanks Atelda! 17:37, July 3, 2011 (UTC)Don

Done! Anything else? 17:42, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nothing that I see. 02:10, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once more votes close. 17:01, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 16:38, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail ~ Silver Nomiantion
I am currently trying to find some quotes and fix some grammer mistakes. Besides those, comments? 07:42, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Can you possibly expand Dark river, Outcast and Long Shadows? 15:16, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Expand those, add more quotes, and can Sunset, Sign of the Moon, and Fading echoes be expanded? 16:28, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change her main quote? ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 19:32, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think the last quote on the page would make a better main quote than the one currently up. Other than that, expand it al little more, and it looks great! 00:25, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Whew! So much to do in a day! xD Anyways, I'll go fix some of those things right now. 10:26, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded all of the PO3 sections, and added two more quotes. 01:56, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Squirrelflame! I like the quotes a lot.....it describes her personality a bit. =D 07:28, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

If possible, could you expand Rising Storm a little bit? 16:34, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that, and the last paragraph of Sign of the Moon. 17:10, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Got it! 13:48, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded most of the books, but I'm still trying to expand SotM's last paragraph, since it looks like it can be more detailed and Rising Storm, using my memory to expand it. 10:50, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

You can always use browse insides... 18:31, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Rising Storm can be expanded anymore. But I can expand Sign of the Moon since I have it. Only problem is, I don't know which page Sorreltail is mentioned, and I haven't read the book yet, so I can't do it as well. :( 20:29, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

You can use the Browse Insides like Mistystar said. Just type in her name on the search bar once in the browse inside and then it'll tell you every page she is seen on. :3 02:27, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded Sign of the Moon, and I think Rising Storm can be expanded to. I'll use the Browse Inside and call my friends in America to see if they can tell me any information about Sorreltail in Rising Strom. 07:44, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Try to expand outcast a bit more. -- 22:56, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. 02:59, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded Rising Storm. As for Outcast, I couldn't expand much, since she isn't mentioned much. 13:20, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rising storm, and Fading Echoes possibly The Fourth Apprentice, need either more detail or they just need to flow better just because there short paragraphs. They seem short and choppy 03:05, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Just add more details and transitional words. 23:03, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Fading Echoes and The Fourth Apprentice look better now, I think, but I need a bit help with Rising Storm. She's not mentioned much in there. 05:53, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rising Storm looks good. I expanded it a little, and it looks really good for a character that's hardly mentioned! 18:20, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Is there anything else? 08:06, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! I don't really thing there's much you can do. 05:02, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Mistystar! =D 06:41, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 16:40, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Runningnose - Silver Nomination
I gave him a new main quote and added a couple of details in his history. Comments? ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 13:35, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand Long Shadows and Forests of Secrets? Oh, and also add one or two more quotes if possible. Looks great! 13:41, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand Fire and Ice, The Darkest Hour, Firestar's Quest, and the NP series? And yes, another quote would be nice, especially if it were a dialogue quote. 01:58, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone take over? I'm going on vacation from today to July 5th. ~Snowdazzle (not signed in)

July 5th is is one week, and to be archived, a nomination usually has to be up for 3, so even if no one takes over, you can still have this. 16:50, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

There needs to be citations for his trivia. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  18:25, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Is anyone going to take over this now that Snowdazzle left the project? 20:18, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. We'll wait a few more days before archiving. 16:53, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

if no one has any objections I'd like to take over. 00:46, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead! Provided that you don't have more than 3 nominations of course. I don't think anyone else wants to do it, anyway. 22:10, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, why don't you fix up the improvements now? :3 04:54, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think there should be more quotes referring to Runningnose thata could be added. 15:57, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, more quotes could definitely be found. Remember to get references for the trivia; that's really important. And I think Fire and Ice and Dawn could be expanded a little more. 17:17, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Henry ~ Silver Nomination
I added the only quotes that he is mentioned, and he is only mentioned once. Comments? 00:56, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add links for the quotes? Where it says Rusty to Smudge in Into The Wild, in page 11, put links on Smudge and Into the Wild. 02:01, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, done. ;) 02:09, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

If possible, can you find another quote? Otherwise, looks amazing! 17:44, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Okay, quote is added! 03:00, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 23:37, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed after more votes close... 15:56, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 16:41, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Barkface ~ Silver Nomination
There was a coming soon template that I filled in, and I expanded it a lot! Anything else? 02:21, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the PO3 sections a bit. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  18:21, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded them, but I can't expand them any more. Anything else? 21:52, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

The style for Starlight could be fixed up a bit, and is it possible to add more detail in A Dangerous Path? 22:06, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, fixed Starlight. I can't really expand A Dangerous Path anymore, but I tried adding another sentence. Anything else? 17:49, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

In Moonrise, I think you used the words "later" and "because" a bit too much. :3 Also, see if you can expand Fire and Ice a bit. 16:15, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I fixed up the transitional words and expanded. Anything else? 17:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can Moonrise or Midnight be expanded anymore? 02:49, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I did, but very slightly. He's not exactly a main character, so I can't say much. Anything else? 20:15, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Other than that, I think its fine. This can be CBVed after more votes close. 16:50, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing - Silver Nomination
I expanded her article and also, couldn't find quotes. She barely says anything in BP, but I'll go back and look for it later. Comments? 23:19, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful job, Icestorm. Is it possibly to get a quote from the narrator? 01:25, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you get a reference for the trivia? Otherwise, you might have to remove it. 17:51, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

The page looks great! The quote is actually a good quote. But if there is a better one, use it. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  18:51, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks great! If yiou can't find any quotes, I could find some for you. Ligh₮ning$torm It's   time   for   some...   fun!!!  19:17, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

well now you need to add a crookedstar's promise history and the trivia needs a refrence 20:57, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I looked through the book, and got my quotes. I referenced the trivia thingy and once I finish CP (Which will probably be like...um...tonight xD) I'll add the history in, or maybe I'll fill it in while I read. -- 22:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Great idea! So, add in the history for CP, and it should be ready. :D 23:00, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

New Project
Please comment on this: Forum:New Project. 01:13, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Inactive Character Page Idea
I am unsure if this is the right place to put this, but I have an idea regarding inactive character pages. By inactive, I mean that they are not changed as regularly as they should be. Some pages, such as Dappletail's, are very out-of-date. I'm suggesting that the members of Project Characters should have an Adopt-a-Character. A character page available for adoption must either be a page in the bronze category or below, or a page that must be changed pretty regularly, such as the current cats, like Brackenfur or Bumblestripe. Adopting users cannot adopt more than three character pages, and the users must have been active warriors for at least 2 months. I think this would be a great idea to keep character pages in high standard, and to bring the lower pages up in rank. What do you think? Echostar 00:48, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The idea you pose is a good one, but we already kind of do that. We nominate characters bronze or lower, and sometimes gold. It wouldn't be right to have this kind of project to the users that don't have a lot of the books, too. In order to do what you're proposing, a user should have a great deal of the warriors books so that they can adopt a character and move it up the ranks. Most of the character pages are marked bronze anyway, so users from PC can nominate those to get them higher. I don't mean to say that your idea is a bad one, but we already do it in different terms. 03:09, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Like SquirrelFlame said, we do that to an extent. We can always have a discussion about demoting a page if the character is a continuous character and not showing it's quality as a silver or gold standard article in the later books. 03:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Or, since we have a rule about automatically promoting allegiance only characters to silver, if they suddenly do appear in a book, such as CP, it would make sense to have the page go back to bronze, unless it has all the history and information added. 15:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fennelstar ~ Silver Nomination
The article has the only quote related to Fennelstar, and I expanded the history as much as possible and fixed up the grammar. Comments? 16:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks good? 17:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 17:53, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. 17:58, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rejoining
YO. Rejoin, please? ;3 01:40, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

xD I'll add you in now. 01:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Rabbitleap - Silver Nomination
He looks ready. :3 02:56, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add more appearances of him as a kit. There must be more of them. 03:29, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded it. Do you guys think I should expand it more? 15:06, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...Can you expand it enough not to have tiny paragraphs? If not then great job! 15:18, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add more transitions and make the paragraphs bigger or more connected. Great work! 18:29, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Could you possibly find one more quote? 20:48, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Donnee. xD 00:45, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, looks great! 18:26, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

This can be CBVed once votes are closed... 21:41, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Meadowpelt ~ Silver Nomination
He can't be expanded as far as I know, and he has all his quotes so comments? 15:43, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Article looks good! Can you see if quotes can be longer. If not, it's ok, but can you add more background? 17:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Explain the quotes a bit more, and it should be ready! :D 18:36, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do it right after camp! 04:02, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok nevermind about that^, I explained them more, I don't think there is any longer quotes, however I could be mistaken. Right now I don't have the book with me because I lent it out, but if my memory serves, I dont believe there are any longer quotes. 03:42, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, if there aren't any more quotes, and can't be expanded, then I guess its ready! :D 05:40, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Quickpaw ~ Silver Nomination
So, I added all the quotes, and expanded the history as much as I could. Comments? 19:15, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The last quote looks out of place and unimportant. I think it should be deleted, even if it reduces the number of quotes. If it is important, add some background. 20:11, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I found another quote to replace it. So, thats all the quotes I can do. Anything else? 20:40, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Nice job. 18:28, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Splashnose - Silver Nomination
I expanded the article a bit, and the quotes look fine. Comments? 02:56, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but this is already up for nomination further up on this page. This will be archived. 16:48, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Woops, fail. :P 18:48, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Larkwing ~ Silver Nomination
Her history cannot be expanded, and I've added all the quotes that pertain to her, so comments? 03:18, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a few layout problems. Are you sure she says nothing else? If not, it's awesome. ;3 05:37, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, besides history and quotes, there really isn't anything else to do. Great work! 16:20, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Nice work! 18:29, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I looked through the whole book and she is not mentioned again other than that little segment. 04:02, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then this will be CBVed...later. 05:26, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Daisyheart ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded the history, and she has all the quote related to her. Comments? 21:34, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like the current main quote so much. I actually like the last one on the page better. :P But since we can't add it, and it can't be expanded, it looks good! 22:22, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I like the last one better too, but its a dialogue quote, so I can't use it. xD 22:48, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, looks amazing! 23:41, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brightflower ~ Silver Nomination
I added all of the quotes relevant to her and I expanded her history. Comments? 14:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

In the main quote where it says: the ShadowClan queen, you can put in Brightflower in parentheses so that the reader can understand the main quote. If you don't want to do that, add in in the background. 22:13, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a bit of spelling, and I added her name in the background so as to not alter the direct text of the quote. Looks good. 23:35, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Good work! I guess this can also be CBVed once more votes are over. 05:18, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Does anybody know why I'm listed as an elder on the main page? 13:50, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure. Did you go inactive for a while? I'll go fix it. 16:17, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shrewtooth - Silver Nomination
I expanded it and added two quotes. Comments? :3 17:43, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to find another quote? If not, it's fine. 22:17, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I'm sure you could find one more good quote though. 05:20, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, didn't Shrewtooth go on the patrol that went to battle Dodge? There's no mention of that in the history. 05:33, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I found another quote, not sure if it's all that good, though. :P And I added in the part about the battle. 01:31, July 11, 2011 (UTC)Th

The new quote you added is great, but you didn't put the page number. xD 15:41, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any way to wrap up his appearance? "Shrewtooth lets out a loud screech, and at the same time, he and Egg pounce on the ginger tom." It just doesn't seem like a good way to end the writing. 17:21, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darkfoot - Silver Nomination
So, apparently, Crowfur was already silver. I really don't know how I missed that. -_- Here's Darkfoot. He's already ready for silver. I didn't have to do anything. 18:31, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can any more quotes be found? If not, looks amazing! 22:19, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

...yeah. What she said. xD So, if he doesn't say anything, can you find a narrator quote? 05:06, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rockshade - Silver Nomination
Mkay, so I'm putting this back up. It was archived a while ago, but I think I had fixed everything up until the point it was archived, at least. So, um, comments? :3 22:26, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to find any quotes that describes him better? Otherwise looks great! 23:39, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd rather go for quality rather than quantity of quotes. 00:16, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, he says a lot, so you should find a good quote for him that describes his personality. 05:05, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well there weren't many good ones left, but I managed to find one better than the first quote I had for him. I think the other two describe his personality fairly well. The second showing his more fierce side, and the third showing his more caring side. :3 22:55, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I guess they're fine... 07:00, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

They're a lot better this time! Nice job! 17:25, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Duskwater ~ Silver Nomination
The history is expanded as much as possible and all the quotes related to her are there too. 05:22, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! If the history is complete and there are enough quotes, I think its ready! 05:35, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's a quote about Sunningrocks when one of them said "We have lost too much already", referring to her, so maybe you could add that to her quotes? 05:39, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't that a bit too general? Well, I guess it counts as a quote. 15:34, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I added that quote now. 15:50, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I found another one and added it. It looks good to me. :D 15:59, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! 18:06, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Then it will probably be CBVed once most votes are closed. 18:40, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

joining
may i join please? 16:13, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

There...I fixed the coding problems. Of course! I'll add you in. See the FAQ for any questions. Welcome to the project! 16:15, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

ok thanx 16:17, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. 16:20, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

oh and what do elders do? 16:18, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Elders are inactive members, but since you re-joined, I added you as a warrior. You may comment on nominations or nominate your own characters. Hope this helps! Also, see the FAQ for more information. 16:21, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

ok thanx 16:25, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. :) 18:35, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pine ~ Silver Nomination
I added a few quotes. Comments? 01:13, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find one more quote? 01:35, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Added! :D 01:51, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 01:52, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The end spoiler warning cuts off one of the quotes. XD I'll go fix that! 17:26, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think it can be expanded some more. I just read the book, and the parts where he appears can be lengthened. 17:29, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Barely; its only a summary. Okay, then expand a bit. 16:00, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Since I have the book, I just went ahead and expanded it. A lot. Like, 7 long sentences. So, I'm pretty sure it can't be expanded any more. Comments? 16:36, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (SHA)- Silver Nomination
There really is nothing more to be done with this article. Cherrypaw is asked by Spottedleaf to show the reader to the StarClan border. That's it. Echostar 16:49, July 13, 2011 (UTC)