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Dapplepelt (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to remove white. Not sure if this color looks ok but I'm not removing the patches. I think the eyes are also the wrong color (they were changed after I was done with them) so I'll fix that on this and the MC in my next reupload  03:46, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more brown patches elsewhere to make these ones fit in better with the rest of the pattern?

Maybe make the patches black? If you don't want to, that's fine, though. I just think the brown color is a bit jarring. 4:13 Fri Oct 30

Reuploaded  04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the med. 09:13, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hey ivy i have mfv right here and it says dappled pelt is an orange and white tortoiseshell. 12:41, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's probably just me or my monitor but the new brown patches look kinda green?

There appears to be a bit of waste under her chin and around her tail. -- 18:02, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Snow, Dapplepelt isn't actually described as dappled anywhere? Plus, dappled is a word used in warriors on more than just torties, and a word rarely used to describe cats outside of the series at all. So basically all it has to do is fit the definition of "spots or round patches" if they're described as dappled. It doesn't have any "official" link with any color or genetics or anything.

Paleh, I think you misunderstood. She's saying Dappled Pelt is described as an orange-and-white tortie, not that she's dappled. Her name in Dawn of the Clans and Moth Flight's Vision is Dappled Pelt, not Dapplepelt.

Ohhh whoops, my bad. I thought that didn't quite make sense... but anyways, where's the cite? I don't see it on the page. I get that it's in mothflight's vision, but it's not currently on the page, so

Well, the book's not released yet, so we can't officially add it. Winter got her copy before the release date.

In that case, should we hold off her images then? I don't know when that's supposed to be released but if it's just going to be reverted, shouldn't the work not be put into it? 03:10, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Since she has a cite now for the white can we revoke the tweak nomination? 06:00, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

no because she's an orange-and-white tortoiseshell, therefore we need to get rid of the brown and reduce the amount of black, basically calling her a calico 13:13, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think we can simply undo her tweak. She already has very little black on her, I don't think it matters. 13:38 Tue Nov 3

It does matter because orange-and-white implies there's less black, and there was very little white on her to begin with 18:02, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I can add more white but this tweak is to remove the white all together, totally different thing and from what I know we're not allowed to change what we were tweaking for initially. And this is a whole different tweak and my tweak time, as well as the others are nearly up  22:35, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

She was confirmed to be an orange-and-white tortie, so that nullifies the "removing the white" tweak- you'd be allowed to do what someone else suggests. Honestly, I also think you'd be allowed an extension, given that when this was put up, we were unaware of her description in Moth Flight's Vision.

Reuploaded I looked up orange and white tortie and this is what I'm sticking with because plenty of these came up in the search results. Imitating smudging without a smudging tool is difficult  07:29, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the white. Also, the white looks gray 07:33, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

But the shading has to be lighter on the white so that it doesn't look gray? I'm not really sure how to define it while at the same time, de-graying it? 07:40, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think it's fine as it is...

I agree w/ Fox tbh. Please define the shading. The white only looks grey on the tail... 11:05, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

It looks good, but define the earpink a bit more? — Even the most simplest of lies   can change   undefinedeverything.undefined  20:03, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I really, really cannot see the leg shading. Please define it. 02:47, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still not sure how to define it while making it less gray ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ any help? 05:57, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

I would say that you could add another layer of thinner, darker shading to define the shading on the legs a little more. Some highlights would also brighten up the white. Personally, only the white on the tail looks gray. perhaps you could possibly thin out the shading there, or reposition the white elsewhere. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:00, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (MC)- Tweaked
^Same as above  03:47, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the paws 09:12, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be gold. 11:38, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  07:29, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (Ancient) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to darken. It also killed the shading >_> 09:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the highlights and shading 10:59, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 21:54, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt. Queen) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked because the highlights were apparently throwing the color off. 09:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste 10:58, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

And she still looks too light 12:26, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Where is the waste? And also, unless my computer is screwing with colors or I need glasses, it's not too light. Which image are you comparing it to? 13:42, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

The waste is to --> side of the tail, near the top. Also, I think the image could be darkened just a tad more, as it is a bit lighter than the images you showed. 22:12, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

its still lighter than the apprentice and such. 14:49, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 04:30, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Declined, sorry ;;;; 11:20, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded took over. if Shinx wants this ill gladly surrender this. 11:28, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Fernshade (W) ~ Tweaked
when yuo try your best but you don't succ

oa was scar, redone by night shine. tweaked to remove white 11:58 Wed Nov 4

could you define the shading? 08:38, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

still working? 02:47, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I just haven't had time to do anything yet. I'll upload tonight. 03:19 Sun Nov 8

Thorn ~ Tweaked
oa = skye 04:44, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Is the ragged fur intentionally a lighter color than the lineart? Also, can you define the ear pink? I only just realized how badly I can't see it.

id probably get rid of the stuff on the ears, unless theres like a cite or something. theres not really enough fur to be messed up unless theyre like torn. 07:46, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought I had to add ragged ears but whatever 08:50, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, if it's part of the description, then keep it o.o Also, I'm still seeing some lighter ragged fur on the chest.

Re-uploaded Ok what I misread it was notched ears not ragged ears O.o 10:46, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

This is the male blank. 18:16 Sat Nov 7

Re-uploaded

Applefur (TF) (W) ~ Tweaked
mottles yada yada

Sharpclaw (SC) (D) - Tweaked
Darkened. OAs are Stoneclaw and me. 02:46, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks kinda brown. Can you try making him more ginger? 04:07, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:13, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks too brown to me. Make him more orange, or maybe aim for a red sort of dark ginger like Russetfur or Flametail. 05:28, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

he looks perfectly ginger. 11:11, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Rain (Alt.E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Iceheart22 and tweaker is Rowanflight. Tweaked for neon ear pink and scars and shading issues. I don't seem to have fixed it enough, the shading's so overblurred >< advice to fixing it? 09:15, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot. o.o It's really dark.

Reupload Argh it's even worse. Not sure how to fix it >< 05:12, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Spiderleg (A) ~ Tweaked
OAs were Shimmerpool, Ivyheart, and SnowedLightning. Tweaked to restrict brown to underbelly only. -- 19:26, November 8, 2015 (UTC)