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Chasing Clouds - For Approval
I will say that Moonpelt's version was very good, and I'll remember to put the rank after my charart next time. I guess I didn't think I needed it since Chasing Clouds has only one known rank. Anyways, comments?--Shaf Girl  23:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh...blur the shading on his gray parts and darken the shading on the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:46, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good....blur the gray. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred some line art on the ear. Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 13:51, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add some grey to the face. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:39, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart's blurred in several places. Raven flight 92 00:21, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more gray patches all over-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:27, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading on the gray parts, darken the white shading, fixed the blurred lineart on the ear and some other places, and added gray to the face and other parts.--Shaf Girl  02:14, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks weird. Quailflight 09:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's blurred a lot. Raven flight 92 23:00, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where exactly do you see it blurred? Maybe it's obvious to you, but I can't tell. My computer crashed a few days ago and I have limited time on my brother's computer, so I can't really look over to see exactly where it's blurred.--Shaf Girl  23:52, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Around the head and tail, I think. Raven flight 92 00:29, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to working on it soon.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:27, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If there are still blurred places, I can fix that. Also, any other problems?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:19, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * The lineart still looks blurred...maybe its this computer as its not my own. Its like fuzzy where it touches the color and it seems almost blurred to the gray patches. Blur the patches more too.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I went over all the fuzzy places and fixed them. Also blurred the patches into the white part a little more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * The white patches on the tail are very grey and the shading needs thickening and blending all over. ✐Sa  NdY  16:09, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:20, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * The shading on his gray patch on his back needs to be blurred more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:39, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:32, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:41, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add more grey to the back paws and make his ear more noticeable. FrostHeart 02:49, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you mean by "more noticeable." I can't change the lineart.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:21, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Frostheart meant earpink, which I agree could be a bit bigger. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:57, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  19:19, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bram ble  15:57, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry; but the shading looks very bumpy. Try blurring it more, (especially on th front leg closest to us) and it seems as if blurred lineart is causing the shading to look bumpy, perhaps smooth it out if it is Night  Fall 08:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:51, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think his eyes are a little dark; maybe you should lighten them up a little. But otherwise, I think he looks great! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 15:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a little more, so it shows up better. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 13:57, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  22:21, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 23:18, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be more coral like. The line-art is blurred in the circled parts. Frostheart♥ 02:08, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine- I've seen gray cats with an ear pink color like that. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   16:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) -- For Approval
This probably isn't my best charar ever, but anyway, comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  22:51, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good. ^-^ I'd say to darken the shading and lighten the highlights because I can't really see them, but this is trully fabulous. ;)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 21:44, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading and lightened highlights, better?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:23, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. :)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 23:18, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the bit of shading on the tail tip and also blur the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:49, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ear pink and tail tip shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:30, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:33, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading overlaps the highlights, but it needs to be a smooth connection. Try blurring the transition some. 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 19:00, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the places where the brown touches the white.

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long, comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:27, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition on the fore arm-- Night s h i n e   R  03:07, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred fore arm transition. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  12:29, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think there's some blurred lineart at the very end of the transition between brown and white on our right end of the tail. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 14:28, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I couldn't find it (if I was looking at the right section...)-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  01:10, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white parts some more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:51, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

On the transition between brown and white on the tail, on this >> side of it it looks like there's a jagged strand of lineart, and I think some of it got blurred while blurring the transition. Does this help you find it? $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 14:38, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, I just now realized that the lineart wasn't blurred, but that it was part of the tail lineart. For some reason it looked different to me, but I have no clue why. That's completely my fail, and I apologize greatly for it. D: (When I'm done making this comment I'll find a book and hit myself in the head repeatedly.) Otherwise for the image, lighten the shading just a little bit. It looks like it's overlapping the highlights when it should look like a smooth transition. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 03:23, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Really nice! I'd say to blur the front right(furthest away) leg where the two colours meet. It might already be blurred... Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  16:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading is too light, isn't it? Icethroat- It's ok, it looked a little odd, so I fixed it. -- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blue: Blur some more. Red: Blurred lnieart. Hope this helps! :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  14:30, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred and fixed as directed above. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  15:01, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight up a bit. Other than that this is perfect!-- Night s h i n e   R  05:46, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) For Approval
fail,fail,such a fail.The sun is the left corner not the right.That's why the shading is on the bottom. S n i c k e r s 11 Days! 23:35, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to resave the blank. Here:



Also, look at a turtorial for the eyes. And I can't see much shading.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:54, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I resized it:

It's going to need to be blurred a lot more to look like her other images and shading. Dark hallows 01:44, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blurring tool is very bad,but I'll try. S n i c k e r s  8 Days! 21:09, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

CoughUseGIMPcoughcough ;) The blurring tool is at least twice as strong as pixlr's. insane  brick'd 21:39, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thats's why I don't use Pixlr... GIMP is so much better (I also have photoshop, but never use it...) Dark hallows 23:12, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to get on any art program for a couple days....Dunno why.Give me ummm 4 days. S n i c k e r s  7 Days! 18:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more. And the line art is messed up at the eye area. FrostHeart 03:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said, I'll try to blur it more. S n i c k e r s   7 Days! 19:45, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  S n i c k e r s   3 Days! Whoohoo! 19:46, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr is fine and is in my opinion better the GIMP once you know how to use it properly. I'll make a tutorial in a day or so showing you how. xD For the image: Blur the hgihlights some more. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:06, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Will do. $ Coolstar  $  19:50, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Needs to be blurred and smudged some more to look like her elder and warrior image, try going for a smoother effect :) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 00:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Rrrr. Pixlr froze when I opened it.Not again. =( I'll keep trying to get it to work. ~ Blue Lightning Strikes! I'm so shocked  11:42, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Snickers Oh the simpleness of simple stuff  13:10, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye line art and I think this will be ready. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:09, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where...Oh never mind, I see.Will do. Snickers Oh the simpleness of simple stuff  21:16, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded<span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">Gol den <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">thorn Epic! 11:51, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful! --  Sky dragon Ride the wind 23:31, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! *blushes* Snickers

Comments? <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">Gol den <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">thorn Epic! 14:07, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome! Just add some more highlights! :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 05:01, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I have highlights.... Snickers!

The highlights look fine to me but the eye still bothers me. I think it's the way you colored it. It looks too big. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eye.I had an extra white space in it, that's why it looked weird. <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">Gol den <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">thorn Epic! 21:09, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Make the ear pink more visible. Icefall Icy Winds 22:07, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

The eye line art still isn't quite right. It looks like the pixels for the eye lash was moved up a bit. Can you try fixing that?-- Night s h i n e   R  05:47, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! I'll have it done in a few minutes. OMG...You killed It! 12:23, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMG...You killed It!  12:38, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the fur. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   23:36, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W) For Approval
So here he is. He's my first one, so I know he's not that great, but what do you think? Let me know if this is under the limit; I think it is, but I'm not sure. Skydragon 18:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow this is really good perhaps where you put the stripe below his ear you should've put another stripe as on his leader image he has two grey stripes either side. Hope that helps :D :)Wildear~101:) 18:32, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but the file needs to be named Gorsestar.warrior.png. Jpg files dont have the best quality and look pixilated. Besides that darken the shading a bit. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice :) Thicken the stripes a bit, in addition to what Wildear and Ashshadow have said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is this better? Skydragon 21:30, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It still looked funny to me, so I fixed it again. Skydragon 18:24, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few more stripes on his haunch and tail and thicken them a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  01:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I don't think he has any more stripes on his tail in his leader image. Is this better though? Skydragon Ride the wind.... 02:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Move the tail stripes up more. Lengthen the stripes on his haunch a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:32, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Lengthened the stripes and moved the ones on his tail. Skydragon Ride the wind.... 17:52, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and this should be ready-- Night s h i n e   R  06:33, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the shading. Skydragon Listen...the wind is singing... 14:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice, Skydragon! There's just one thing that's bugging me; on the first tabby stripe going down the back, there's a pixel that sits in between the Y fold. Does that make any sense to you? Holly dapple  01:54, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

It bugged me too, but I looked at the leader image and it was in the leader image, so... -- <span style="color:#09FF63;Font-family:Vivaldi;Background:#67C5CF;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.15em; color:#379502">Snickers

Oh, okay, then. Sorry. If anything, brighten the highlights on the face. If you don't use highlights (I don't think they're neccesary), then don't bother, but it looks like you do, so maybe try that. Holly dapple  03:22, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added a highlight to the face.  Sky dra gon    Follow the wind...  14:46, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be my moniter but I can barely see the shading. Can you darken it more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:16, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''darkened shading.  Sky dragon Ride the wind 18:35, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try changing the color of the ear pink to a more darker color, like on Ashfoot. This looks really nice! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 14:02, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is that better? It's not darker, but it's closer to Ashfoot's.  Sky dragon Ride the wind 14:50, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I think that looks much better....can't really see anything else. Good job! =D -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 19:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 23:15, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

No, it matches the leader image. I think it looks fine.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  23:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I'm gonna be gone until about the 20th of this month, and I won't be able to work on him. Please don't delete him. Thanx!-- Whisper on the wind   Skydragon  03:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know...I think it needs more stripes. <font color="Turqoise">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 03:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like his leader image. I tink it has the right number of stripes; you can't even see the entire side of his body in the leader image anyway. Kaoru  Hitachiin  21:43, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

He does need to add a couple more stripes to the (our) right foreleg. <font color="#009900">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786 22:06, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know about that, Moonpelt, because I've been working on Gorsestar's deputy image, so I've been studying the leader image very hard, and I haven't seen any other stripes on that foreleg, though Skydragon does need to add one of those funny spots to it. Holly dapple  15:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Bird That Rides the Wind (Ro)- For Approval


This is the 35th I think. If it isnt, than decline it. But anyways this IS my first charart! i feel proud of it! Is there anything I need to improve?Rubyblaze 22:34, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Blur the mud streaks. Darken the ear pink and nose colour. The line art looks a little blurred-- Night s h i n e   R  22:48, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Smudged the mud streaksRubyblaze 22:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to fix the line art and darken the nose colour and ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  23:01, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- darkened the ear and nose color.Rubyblaze 23:14, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like a jpeg. Convert into png and name it BirdThatRidestheWind.rogue -- Quailflight 23:16, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It actually is png right now. It just looks pixelated for some reason. Fix the line art and make the mud streaks a little more blurred-- Night s h i n e   R  23:23, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay. I am having trouble with the line art with I fixed the mud streaks.Rubyblaze 23:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can help. Can you please stop putting the image into a thumbnail?-- Night s h i n e   R  00:04, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed line art-- Night s h i n e   R  00:48, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. Sorry. I thought that was the way you were suppose to do. *turns pink* Is there anything else I need to do?Rubyblaze 01:04, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes so they are more visible-- Night s h i n e   R  01:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better?Rubyblaze 23:52, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Now just blur the stripes, and I think she'll look good. =) Nice job on the shading, by the way! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 14:04, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes some more. It looks good. Icefall Icy Winds 00:42, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) For Approval
I couldn't edit the Reservations Table... Could someone do that for me? Thanks. Comments? --<font color="#009900">Mo<font color="#00FF00">onp<font color="#009900">elt  <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">TM&lt;/font&gt; 12:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get it. $ Coolstar  $  12:55, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Amazing! Awesome! I love it! Make the ear pink more visible though. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  13:43, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the markings a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  16:25, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I used the same exact color. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 01:30, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and sharpen the markings-- Night s h i n e   R  01:34, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried.... Comments? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:07, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripe more on her haunch next to her tail (right where they meet).

Reuploaded Please remmeber to sign your posts with four ~. Better? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 15:51, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights on the tail look like they're in the wrong direction; for the light source to be the same for all of the image, the highlights on the tail should be on the tail-tip and a little bit below on the side that they're on now, but not too much. Also, there's some pixels of too light of a color on the front legs. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 02:05, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 14:35, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

There is an outline of light pixels on the right side of the tail. Add a few more markings of the dark golden onto her haunch and shoulder.-- Night s h i n e   R  16:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reploaded Better? <font color="#009900">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786 17:50, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Great! Just darken the ear pink a tad. S u n s p i r i t Gotta Lo ve New leaf 07:22, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#009900">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786 15:18, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear that is farther from us a bit.-- Night s h i n e   R  05:49, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

That's an effect of the highlights I think. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   23:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnpelt Alt Apprentice - For Approval
Can someone redo the highlights for me? It's not fixing. Also, I'm probably not going to work on this until Saturday...unless I'm lucky any old time. -- Quailflight 11:07, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Hurrah for pixlr's color replacement tool! -- Quailflight 11:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some. The ones on her haunch and shoulder look white. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:42, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

That's the problem. I need some help with them. So I would like someone to correct them for me. Quailflight 23:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I was able to fix the bottom highlight, but could someone give me help with the top? -- Quailflight 10:45, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Help and comments? I'm the world's most horrible charart person. I don't know what happened with my style. Quailflight 08:14, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Comments? -- Quailflight 09:28, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading some more. If you can't do it I'll be happy to help. Also, make the earpink brighter but not too bright. I can't see it. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  16:31, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'll do the earpink, but the highlights are killing me. Quailflight 11:07, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I think Birchy's helping me with the highlights. Quailflight 08:56, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Kay I'll blur the highlights for you Quail. Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  16:44, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Songbird - For Approval
yay guess what ice isn't leaving. :D Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:15, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! You're staying! You need to add tabby stripes and possibly a highlight to her belly area, other than that it's really good. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:20, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:29, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely :) Add a highlight to the face, and blur the highlight on her belly Night  Fall 23:04, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the hanch highlight, otherwise this is stunning :3 Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 00:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, everyone! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 00:22, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on the belly (sort of between the front and back legs) needs more blurring. I really love her color ^^. Blur the back shading some more.-- Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 07:32, June 5, 2010 (UTC)--

Reuploaded. Thanks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 01:12, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The colour looks a little too pale. Darken the shading and blur all the highlights more. Make the nose colour darker-- Night s h i n e   R  01:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 01:26, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, nose colour, ear pink and highlights. Fill in the white pixel on the arm facing us.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:27, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made the shading really dark.... <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 12:08, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading and stripes. → •Maple  fern•  ←  22:30, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading. Darken face, right arm, and belly shading. Lighten the ear pink a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  06:41, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Ice fall 21:10, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and blur it. Darken the stripes Fill in the white pixel on the fore arm. Brighten the white paws a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  16:58, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ice fall 22:56, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Ice fall 23:26, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't look natural. Make them a bit more curved and thicken them. Darken the shading, but not too much. Blur the white transition.-- Night s h i n e   R  01:34, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? Icefall Icy Winds 19:49, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it does to me. If anything, the shading needs to be darkened a tiny bit, because it looks a little too light to me, and then make sure to blur it. The highlights on the leg and tail need to be blurred, and maybe darkened just a tad too. The highlight on the stomach needs to be brightened more. I don't know if it's just me, but I think the the ear pink needs to be a bit darker, and maybe the nose too. Otherwise, it's very sweet! Holly dapple  02:55, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, though. I can see it very clear. And it can't blur. But I'll do the other stuff. Icefall Icy Winds 20:05, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I made the highlight too bright... Icefall Icy Winds 20:54, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Personally I'd already thought that the highlight was too bright before it was brightened, but that may just be me...can you get the highlight to how it was before you lightened it, but keep the rest of the image as it is now? $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 20:57, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done. Icefall Icy Winds 21:10, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. The stripes look too much like lines and they are all going in the same direction. There is a highlight on the belly where there should be shading. Darken the shading a bit more. Make the white pixels in the eye a bit bigger-- Night s h i n e   R  05:50, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is the style of stripes I always use... Icefall Icy Winds 12:10, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, but maybe brighten the belly highlights. =) Mo    us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   23:04, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I made it look worse. Icefall Icy Winds 23:07, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for my terrible redline. That is where I think you should darken the shading. Get rid of the highlight on the belly. The tail stripes look fine, but the other stripes are too line-like. Blur them more and don't make them all the same length-- Night s h i n e   R  06:28, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

That splotch on the belly could be blurred. Quailflight 07:57, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, it's okay. I just want to withdraw this. May I? Icefall  Icy Winds 11:49, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Of course you can, Ice. It is your image. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:59, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
Oatpaw yay! Comments? (This is 35- there is one discussion) Kaoru   Hitachiin  01:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice! Maybe blur the earpink more, and blur the shading (especially the shading under the muzzle) and highlights. Other than that, he looks nice! Holly dapple  01:58, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Kaoru   Hitachiin  23:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, you got the shading/highlights thing, but the ear pink is hardly visible now. Holly dapple  01:44, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Kaoru  Hitachiin'''  01:52, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks like a grayish-pink color. It needs to be more of a reddish color. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 15:04, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Kaoru  Hitachiin  00:33, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add some ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  01:34, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is some ear pink, Nightshine, it's just hard to see. It needs to be more like #e18a8a or #d28282, for examples. I think the second number would work better. Holly dapple  03:19, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Kaoru  Hitachiin  11:59, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit more and make it more pinkish/reddish-- Night s h i n e   R  16:17, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the earpink is light enough. What does anyone else think? Ringo  Starr  14:19, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine in making it a bit more pinkish/reddish. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 14:51, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Ringo  Starr  00:55, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great!-- Night s h i n e   R  05:51, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. It looks very nice. Icefall Icy Winds 12:06, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (W) - For Approval
I like how he turned out! :3 What about you?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:27, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just blur the top of his head some more (the shading) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 22:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: What else?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:44, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, it looks a little lighter than his rogue image that is up for approval. Move the ear pink up some more and blur it-- Night s h i n e   R  23:00, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 01:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 12:59, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink just a hair, since I can't see it too well, and move the ear pink to the center of the ear rather than on the side. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 14:06, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:33, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to blur the highlights on his haunch and arm a bit more. River pelt Heart of Amber 19:40, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

They look fine to me...are you sure?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah just a bit more you know where the highlight is very bright, like gold colored. River pelt Heart of Amber 19:53, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

They're supposed to be like this. They're supposed to be bright, right?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It depends on the base pelt color. Derken them a tiny bit but not much. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:54, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

THe higlights are very focused, make them a bit bigger and slightly (not much) bigger. It's very good, Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I need help. I can't make them smaller abd darker without re-doing him. Anyone willing to help me?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 16:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think the size is fine. Blurring them some more will darken them a tad. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:05, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better or should I fix it more?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:17, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up and make it more triangular-- Night s h i n e   R  05:52, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on his shoulder a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 12:05, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 14:34, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart(W) For Approval
This is like...Horrible. Comments?<font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 01:59, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is great!! Just thicken the shading a lot so it is like his medicine cat image. Blur the stripes more-- Night s h i n e   R  02:03, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? GIMP is SO much better than Pixlr's blurring tool! <font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 22:51, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect! This is really nice. :) Moontail  Me Rocks!  14:42, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand where your light source is from. Most images have the shading on the tail, for example, on the bottom. And, the shading needs serious blurring. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   18:50, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Sorry, it just doesn't blur anymore.<font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 20:23, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the other side a little (the lighter one) so that it looks somewhat even? And the ear pink is too small. 雨 晶須  21:55, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred alot more. I can help if you'd like. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:42, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you Ash :) I'd appreciate it. I spent like 5 minutes on blurring!<font color="Turqoise">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 02:27, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. I've blurred the shading some for you Sky. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan'''  19:39, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I can't tell where the light source is coming from; on the shading of the body it's from one direction, and on the shading of the tail it's from another almost opposite. The light source needs to all be from one direction, so either change the shading on the body or the tail (probably easier on the tail). $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 02:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. Quailflight 07:58, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine as is. It looks like the approved example and I always thought the light was coming from above. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:57, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made earpink bigger. Oh, and thanks Ash <font color="Turqoise">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 22:47, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. If they don't or won't blur, than use the smudge tool to get a similar effect. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   16:39, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ki) - For Approval


Yeah, well, can't say much about this one. Pretty bad, eh? SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 06:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks odd. Try making it bend toward him. Make the stripes more v shaped like his leader image.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:25, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He looks black on my screen. Maybe lighten him a bit? Skydragon Listen...the wind is singing... 14:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow I haven't been on in soooo long... Anyway, he's a tad too dark, like Skydragon said, and I think there are a few gray pixels near the top of his tail (in background). 雨 晶須  21:15, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the top of his tail a bit. It looks mor squished than broken to me. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:45, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've copied the colour from the rogue image, but if it isn't right, then I'll change it. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 13:47, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't exactly understand what you mean by bending the tail, and Ashshadow, how do I make it look broken? Sharpen the bend in the tail? Also, this can only be uploaded again after five - six days. See here. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 13:57, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I just meant thicken the top part a little bit. It looks flatened rather than broken. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:26, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on his chest and forepaws. Holly dapple  04:51, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 07:04, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I've noticed that the other images of Brokenstar. He Is a little bit lighter than that. S u n s p i r i t Gotta Lo ve New leaf 07:26, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I made a redline for what I meant about the tail. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:16, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D)- For Approval
Yay! Second charart! =) What should I do to improve it? <font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear pink should be darker, shading needs to be blurred more, and her tail needs more shading. 雨 晶須  23:12, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Close the gaps in the shading and blur it more. Also add shading to the legs and tail. FrostCloud 23:14, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks yellow as opposed to ginger. Try saturating her some Night  Fall 23:19, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, as stated above, and the ear pink needs to be moved more into the ear and lightened. Also, remember to put "For Approval" in the discussion title.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  14:14, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The eye should be made like this: File:Eye Chart.png (see the warrior version), instead of the current eye. The saturation tool is a sponge located near the dodge and shading tools, so use that to saturate the pelt color and give it more of a ginger color. Define the ear pink some more, but not too much. The two hind paws should also have shading, and the top of the head. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 15:35, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading and define the ear pink. Darken the shading on the tail, and add shading to the back paws, and muzzle to the top of the head. The ear not facing us should have shading, too. Ice fall 00:11, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 14:46, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Darken the shading on the main part of her body and darken the earpink. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:37, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well, could be just me, but I don't see any highlights. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 03:33, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Blur the shading-- Night s h i n e   R  03:43, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:20, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Shadings needs to be blurred a bit more and make the ear pink more pinkish, this is good overall ;) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 04:22, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 19:52, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. --  Sky dragon Ride the wind 23:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shadings on the head.. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  02:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:20, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is really sweet :) The back shading is very thick though, maybe thin it a bit? And maybe make the ear pink a bit pinker? On my computer, it looks very red. Brightfrost  of SunClan...  15:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. =) Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:05, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:08, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a lot and blur the shading. The fur colour is a little bright, so I suggest saturating it a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  05:52, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

This may be my monitor, but the white pixel on the eye looks a dull, you might want to brighten it a bit. River pelt Heart of Amber 20:26, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think it might be your monitor, because it looks fine on mine... then again, I'm probably misunderstanding what your talking about. =) However, I did darken the ear pink and blurred the shading and saturated it; is it better? Oh, and by the way, I'm stuck in a summer school session from June 14th to June 25th, so I might have some difficulties getting on to work, but I should be able to. I'm going out of town after that though, and I won't have access to a computer very often, if at all.<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:21, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. It still looks too neon orange coloured. Darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  23:24, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC) - For Approval


There's a discussion, so is this ok to put up? Well, I don't think all of my skills have abandoned me. ^^ Comments? →  Batteh   ←  14:50, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

It looks very nice, Blue. The only thing I see is that the ear pink looks slightly lopsided in the ear. Other than that she looks lovely. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 16:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes a bit lighter. They look brown on my screen. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Bramble. ^^ Straigtened ear pink, lightened eyes. →  Batteh   ←  18:46, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

They still look somewhat brown on my screen unless it cant be lightened more Birdstar 19:03, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

I really don't want to lighten them anymore, they look amber to me. →  Batteh   ←  19:17, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

I agree with Birdstar. Or you can darken the pelt colour a bit more. Blur the ear pink more-- Night s h i n e   R  19:41, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened eyes, although I think they're too light now, and blurred ear pink. →  Batteh   ←  20:46, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

Darken and blur the shading. Make the ear pink a bit smaller.-- Night s h i n e   R  01:40, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

It isn't very bornw, it's more dusty coloured. Make it browner, like Mousefur. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:08, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The description says dusty brown. She doesn't have to change it. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 17:59, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Bluestar1776, but run the burn tool over the shading once or twice and brighten the highlights (if you're using them). Good job! Holly dapple  05:08, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think she should, it's too creamy. It needs to be a bit more browner not a lot. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:55, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

If everyone agrees, make the eyes more of an orangy-red color. -- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:54, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

But if you don't want to, it's fine.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:55, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:26, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - For Approval
There is one discussion, Cinderpelt123, so this should be under the limit. Comments/Criticism for Goldenflower? -- 雨 晶須  20:50, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit. Blur the chest shading. Darken haunch shading-- Night s h i n e   R  20:53, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah blur it a bit more as Nightshine said as the dark ginger looks a bit splotchy on my computer screen:)Wildear~101:) 13:14, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks kinda off with the dark splotches everywhere. Highlight the tail and muzzle more. FrostCloud 15:34, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't she get a cut ear in battle training from Bluepaw?

Scarletwind 21:30, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like she has darker patches of fur on her pelt. Other then that its great :) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 23:15, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Put a nick in the ear closest to us. Quailflight 08:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The darker patches of fur are supposed to be shading, and I can't blur them any more. And yes, I'll add the nick in her ear. 雨 晶須  01:51, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

She looks slightly lumpy. Try blurring those dark parts more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I'll do that in a sec. 雨  晶須  22:04, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is it better? I blurred the dark parts, but it didn't work so well so I lightened them. 雨 晶須  23:40, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. Just blur the haunch shading a tiny bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  23:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Anything else to work on? 雨 晶須  00:04, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:45, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

That is where the light source is coming from, so there should be no back shading. Darken the shading on the neck a tad then this should be ready-- Night s h i n e   R  05:54, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, okay, then lighten the ear pink a little. I can't really see it. Icefall Icy Winds 12:03, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks fine on my screen-- Night s h i n e   R  23:26, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Ice, it looks a bit dark to me. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   23:30, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D)~For approval


Okay now I look at this I can now see some major changes but here he is improvements please?

Edit how do you change the pxl on it so I can get it 127x155 pxl I'm not sure if its my computer or not...

Oh yeah thisis the biggest size I could get him....:)Wildear~101:) 13:12, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

First,he's a tabby, second, sorry, but it's over the limit.<span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">Gol den <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">thorn Epic! 14:00, June 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * For future reference Wildear, remember to sign with 4 ~ and to get a bigger picture of the blank you have to right click the blanks and select open in new window or new tab. That way you'll have the full size of the blank. With the galleries installed, it takes away the feature of copying the direct size of the image. Stated before this is over the limit so this will have to be declined.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:44, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok sorry I thought this might've been ok but I must've counted it wrong...yeah I realised my computer must be wrong in a way I'll take your advice to heart Shimmerpool.:)Wildear~101:) 21:27, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok sorry I thought this might've been ok but I must've counted it wrong...yeah I realised my computer must be wrong in a way I'll take your advice to heart Shimmerpool.:)Wildear~101:) 21:27, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wildear; this can stay here as two images were just approved and there is now room. But for future reference, please count more carefully. Do what Shimmer said and redo the image in the full-sized blank and make him a tabby cat. Also, please put a link in your signature by typing Wildear~101 into your preferences. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 00:20, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay thanks Bramble I'll get it reuploaded for tomorrow:)Wildear~101:) 18:26, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED~ Better? It was what I could at short notice I got art project so I fitted it in anyways!:)Wildear~101:) 19:59, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's not a bad tabby but it needs to look more like his other images here. Also make the earpink more triangular. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:01, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby markings need to be bigger like his other images, and make the earpink more pinkish and blur it some more. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 14:11, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded~Ear pink made more triangular thickened stripes and blurred some more also add some more colour on his haunches anything else?:)Wildear~101:) 19:49, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

He has to many stripes and his color is off. Try taking the color from this--->. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:11, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED~Gave him less stripes and gave him a more brownish grey affect licke his elder image. Like Ash said...anything elses? :)Wildear~101:) 16:18, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes need to strech out father like this: Hope that helps!. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  01:47, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okey dokey I'll get it done for saturday as I am busy a few days:)Wildear~101:) 21:11, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Make sure the stripes don't over lap the line art. Fix the eye and darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  01:36, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

He still looks closer to gray to me than gray-brownish like or whatever he is. I think lightening him should do or unsaturating.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay made him look more the colour he is made sure the lines didn't overlap fixed the eye and darkened ear pink. So anything else? :)Wildear~101:) 13:38, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eye still isn't correct. Look at my tutorial to see what the eye should look like-- Night s h i n e   R  23:43, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 14:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, darken the stripes and blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Also add a pupil in the eye. Icefall Icy Winds 20:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I've sttarted already I'll put it up tomorrow Wildear~101  17:57, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Fernpelt (A) - For approval
This wasn't too hard. → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:31, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nice highlights! Just lighten the ear pink to make it more visible. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 00:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't really look like her warrior image. Lighten the eye colour. Did you take the colours from her warrior image?-- Night s h i n e   R  01:03, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the color could be a little darker but I think the stripes look fine. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  10:47, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and sharper. Ice fall 00:51, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on his haunch could use some more bluring along with his front legs. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 14:12, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try to lighten her ear pink. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:07, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Maplefern, good work! The ear pink could be paler, but maybe in the same section of reddish-pink. The shoulder highlight needs bluring, and the stripes on her haunch look too blurry to me. Other than that, it' really good! Holly dapple  22:58, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined, Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:22, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I was busy this week. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:57, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed all things. → •Maple  fern•  ←  12:12, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar(K)-for approval


Hope this goes better than the last time

i think i could do a bit more for the tabby stripes on his shoulder...

Scarletwind 02:03, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Er it's good but this is the 36 but you can only have 35 Birdy 02:12, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hi, It's okay, but the stripes look a little bit unreal. Blur the shading and I de-thumbed it. SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:30, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

ok then make the ear pink and the nose Birdy 11:44, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some more and make the ear pink more pinkish. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 14:13, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more like this?

Scarletwind 14:19, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more.. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  02:49, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Third time's the charm... I hope, I hope...

Scarletwind 22:50, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Don't rename the file every time. Just re-upload it. There is an outline of black around the ear pink and it is touching the line art-- Night s h i n e   R  23:20, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I'll get it eventually... I hope.. I hope...

Scarletwind 23:21, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is it just me or is that ear pink purple? It is on my computer. :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 09:09, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

It does look kind of purple...  Sky dragon Ride the wind 18:16, June 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * They look like the shading for a black or white cat which we don't need for Tigerkit. Just get the pink from his other images and it'll be fine. Also it looks like you made an outline for the ears, heh, I notice small things. Could you get rid of those and just blur the ear pink?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:11, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more if you can. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hope this looks OK, I'm going away tomorrow and I won't be able to fix it for a few days

Scarletwind 01:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

When you return, make the ear pink central and a more pale, peachy-pink colour like the one on his leader image, (it might be an idea to take the colour from the image itself). Also, the stripes on his sides look seriously clumpy compared to his other images, and the highlights on his stomach and face look like patches. :3 Sorry for being so critical though, he's a hard character to do. Look at his other images for references. Have fun wherever you're going away to! Brightfrost of SunClan...  19:38, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for all the advice!:) I'll get on it right away!

Scarletwind 14:27, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers up for aproval (again)
Okay, I tried to make it better, here it is I ran the burn tool along some more-as you told me too. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:01, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading looks nice. Try making the ear pink a little bigger and darkening it up a bit, like on Reedwhisker or Breezepelt. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:25, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. I don't really see any-- Night s h i n e   R  23:29, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened the shading a little, and I darkened the ear-pink. Better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:33, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The whole thing still needs to be darkened. It looks like a dark gray cat on my computer. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:17, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's dark-grey on my computer, I think you should darken it. :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 09:08, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yea darken it so it looks more black. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:03, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Should I run the burn tool along it or use another colour comepletely? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:24, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The burn tool should work. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  16:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Amberclaw- For Approval
I'm sorry that I'm one over the limit, but I've been waiting for a couple of days now. =P Anyway, comments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 01:02, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit so it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  01:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Nightshine. I guess I just got impatient. =P I won't do it again. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 01:40, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

It can stay now. Blur the back shading. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  16:19, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, guys. I feel bad about it now. Anyway, I tried to blur the back shading more, but the blur tool on Pixlr is a little iffy. Is this better or does it need more? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 13:53, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

If your having trouble with blur tool reduce the hardness a bit I ussually have it 41 for minor adjustments or even fifty for big shadings and i use the size 9 to go blur my things. Try doing that it might work :)Wildear~101:) 21:16, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that seemed to help. Thank you for the advice! =) Is this any better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 00:33, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken it a bit- it seems awfully bright. Other than that darken the ear pink a smidge and maybe add a little highlight nearer to the front leg so that it has a defined shoulder. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   16:37, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 12:00, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Pearnose (MC) - For Approval
With one declined and three discussions this makes the 35th. I just loved her name and had to give her a go... though I think I've lost the knack. Anyway, constructments? -- Sandy star 23:41, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Adorable Sandy. Just blur the ear pink just a tad. :3 . Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  23:45, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

You should fix the 'lost the knack' into 'gotten even more wonderful with art'. XD The pelt and the eye color are absolutely beautiful. The only thing I see that needs fixing is that the herbs are missing some shading. The ear pink actually looks pretty good; I'd only blur it a small bit. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 23:50, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! Darken the tail stripes. Did you change the line art on the eye?-- Night s h i n e   R  23:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded: Lineart fixed, stripes darkened, earpink blurred and shading/highlights added to the herbs. -- Sandy star 00:09, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks great Sandy, all I see is that the muzzle shading should be darkened a tad. Lol, agreed Bramble. Ice  fall 00:24, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It seems a little dark. Lighten it a tad-- Night s h i n e   R  00:27, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I kept looking at it for 10 minutes, trying to find a flaw, but could not. Excellent work, congrats! Helixtalk 05:35, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's beautiful! You would never lose the knack Sandy! Comments before approval anyone? SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 07:24, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded: Nightshine - I reluctantly lightened her (I liked the old colour myself, but ya know). Ice - I have not darkened the muzzle shading as that is highlighted not shaded to start with. Helix - Glad you like her :) Sunspirit - Again, I am glad you like her but I'm afraid only senior warriors can approve images or set the 24 hours =) Anything else? -- Sandy star 09:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * She looks good, I see nothing wrong with her. Icefall  Icy Winds 12:08, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * Sandy, you have to stop making me feel inferior! LOL, Pearnose looks gorgeous. Only thing I see is blur the shading on the haunch.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  18:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded: Shading blurred. Anything else? -- Sandy star 19:48, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I liked the old (dark) version better, it was much nicer; this looks "dusty" because of the unsaturated color. Of course, this is only my opinion; what do you all think? Kind regards, Helixtalk 20:22, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I really like the new one. Just add another stripe near the tail tip-- Night s h i n e   R  01:37, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm with Helix. The herb shading is a bit off. The bottom right is a dark while the others are light. Sorry to by picky, your work is always wonderful to see, Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:18, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I liked its original pelt color as well. It was richer, as well as a dark brown whereas the new version looks just like a regular old brown. That can be easily fixed by saving one of the past revisions of the image, should you so choose, Sand. And Fawnstorm, how should the herb shading be oriented? You weren't very clear about that; it looks fine to me right now. Are there any other comments about the pelt, so we can reach a consensus? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 05:11, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I have to admit that I'd already got a darkened version with the same improvements made as the lighter version on my computer because I preferred it... I only changed the colour because I was asked to ;) So I have uploaded that and will fix the herbs as soon as I know what to fix - the extra stripe will be added at the same time. -- Sandy star 13:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink a bit I can barely see it Wildear~101  14:23, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (R) - For Approval
Well, I'm not sure how this went. Shruggy talk 07:07, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, except you'll notice that there's a black flick on the white chest, maybe lighten the ear pink a bit, but otherwise good! SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 07:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The Black flick, is part of the line art. ;) Shruggy talk 08:56, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh Sorry! Laughs SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:58, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Might just be me Shruggy, but did you pick pure black for the colour? It needs to be light black, dark grey. I can't see the lineart. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  11:47, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, he didn't. This is well done Shruggy. Blur the white, and lighten the pelt color a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 12:06, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also added shading to the back ear. :) Shruggy talk 13:55, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I was on a school comp and it looked really black, it dosen't now. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:21, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Shruggy talk 08:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Looks Great Shruggy! I've been looking at it, couldn't find anything that bad! :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 08:35, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible for you to smudge the white more? Like a fade in? And I think it would look a tiny bit better it there was some shading on the white part on the chest. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:46, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The white on the chest seems awfully straight, I agree with Warrior, just use the smudge tool and then blur to make it. . . um. . . rounder. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   03:11, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? Shruggy talk 11:13, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks very dark. Make the pupil in the eye a bit smaller. Blur the white transitions-- Night s h i n e   R  23:27, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Categorizing Chararts
Hi all! I would like to suggest to project coordinators to place all approved charart in the relevant image categories when approving. This will not only keep it more organized; it will also help in making statistics, running scripts, keeping track of things etc.

I'm currently manually going through all approved images to update their categories if needed; it will be done soon, but for new images, the approver should do it. Note: only approved images should go in these, do not add declined or user chararts here.

I hope this doesn't come down the wrong way; I'm not trying to act as a leader and tell people what to do or such; it's just a proposal for keeping things together. I hope you won't be angry with me. :)

Kind regards, Helixtalk 18:19, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with this. It sounds ideal. What do you think, Bramble??  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  20:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I've been meaning to do this in any case. It's a good idea to have our images categorized so they can be kept track of, and less work to do later. I think everyone else will agree as well. And Helix; don't worry yourself over nothing, it's merely a suggestion you thought up and proposed. Thank you. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 05:05, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Bramble, many thanks for your kind reply. I'm currently done with letters A-H and hopefully I will finish them by the end of next week. I also made a table here listing the approved chararts by type, by counting the number of files in the respective categories. Helixtalk 05:40, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (W)- For Approval
Declined images and discussions don't count. So, I took Dapplepelt's med. image and tried to work it to match the warrior one- and epically failed. Thanks to Bramble for helping. I also edited the highlights a bit.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  18:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the gold patch on the nose a little more.  Sky dragon Ride the wind 19:30, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the gold patches on the nose, the tail tip, and the creamish one in the middle.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  20:13, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Echostar, I didn't change the colors because that was the effects of the highlights.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  20:15, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The line art looks smudged around the muzzle. Blur the tail patches some more-- Night s h i n e   R  00:45, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The lineart was fine. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   20:22, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there are dark splotches around the whiskers-- Night s h i n e   R  06:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

There aren't. It's probably from her med. cat image if it looks like it. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   00:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 14:21, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudstar(W)- For Approval
Not much to say. He was harder to do than expected. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:00, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

He looks really good Ashshadow! but just brighten the white pixel on his eye. River pelt Heart of Amber 22:24, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the rump and hind leg. :) So beautifuuull! Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  14:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 14:31, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  15:56, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the white pixel in the eye. Blur the patch on his shoulder some more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan'''  19:59, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the midriff shading. Otherwise amazing job, Ash. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   00:29, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Mouse but it won't blur anymore. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  10:45, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this is really good, Ashshadow, but the eye looks strange. I can tell instead of the eye color being in a backward L shape, it's in a square. Could you add another black pixel? Do you see what I mean? Another thing would be the ear pink--it's too pale. I can hardly see it. Holly dapple  02:55, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

There are many ways to do eyes and this is the style I use. Sorry but I'm not going to change it. Also the earpink is the same color as his leader image and I can see it quite clearly. Does anyone else have a problem with it? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:23, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the top of the white patch on the shoulder. Icefall Icy Winds 20:38, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan'''  21:35, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W)- For Approval
I made a re-do. Accidentally erased old message here XD Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  21:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad. His earpink is a bit lopsided and his eye is a bit neon. Fix those and maybe add/brighten highlights or shorten the shading. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink, dampened eye. Brightened highlights and blurred well. Comments? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  14:22, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger or shorten the shading again. Make the ear pink bigger and darken it-- Night s h i n e   R  16:13, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, The one on the left is the same one, just I edited it. The one on the right is a whole new one. Which one is best and I should keep edititng?? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  17:33, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Both are nice, but the one on the right looks more normal to me. On the muzzle, if you choose the one on the right, the highlights need to be brightened, and the haunch and shoulder highlights need blurring. The shading on his back could be darkened as well. Holly dapple  19:29, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hope it looks good! First time I actually did highlights like that... Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  21:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

They look good for your first time. Just blur them some more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:07, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlithgts and back shading more. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   03:10, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Dappletail (A) - For Approval
Here's Dappletail as an apprentice. And on that note, I'm back for the 5th time! xD I'm not sure I like the shading, so what are your comments? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:49, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this is over the limit. Wait until the number of charats go down to 34 or less. The image will be declined. Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  18:07, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't Nightfall have this reserved...? Icefall Icy Winds 19:35, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, she has Rabbittail reserved-- Night s h i n e   R  19:39, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back, Warrior. This won't be declined, it's under the limit. Image-wise, this doesn't really look like any of Dappletail's other images. This image has patches, and the others have stripes. Also, I can't really see the ear pink, and the shading on the muzzle is too dark to see the lineart. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 01:45, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (R)- For Approval
I was gone again, it was rather sudden. I've also been SOO busy with school (I'm homeschooled... basically I'm doing finals I guess?) Anyway, I changed the shoulder and ear. Dark hallows 04:47, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more and blur the tail shading-- Night s h i n e   R  06:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? This ear pink is impossible to fix Dx. Dark hallows 20:33, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

If you want, I could help you. I had the same problem with his warrior image. :)-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear pink looks fine. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   16:18, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

The colour for the ear pink is fine. It looks a little to blended in though. Define it a bit more and this will be perfect-- Night s h i n e   R  05:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Whitetail (A) For Approval
My first apprentice this is the 34 this is another white cat fail so yeah comments?  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 14:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add earpink. Kaoru  Hitachiin  14:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make her eyes greener, and give her a pinkish tint like her warrior image. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   15:23, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Er it wont work its either too white or too pink besides isint she a white cat.....  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 16:37, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean? Just take the ear pink colour from her warrior image and add it on here. Blur the chest and back shading a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  17:44, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

On her warrior image she has a pink tinge and my concern was shes a white cat not a cream cat  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 19:16, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded added ear pink and blurred shading on chest and back

Lighten the ear pink and blur it. Remember to sign with four tildes ~ -- Night s h i n e   R  19:39, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Just use the color dropper like I did for the color. It worked on my Whitetail. I just withdrew mine. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   20:30, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Er how do i get the pinish tinge on mine  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 21:05, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Select a pink color, go to the bucket on pixlr, change the opacity to around 10 or 20, whichever you think is better, and fill in the whole image, making sure it is all even. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   00:28, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added pinkish tinge and made ear pink more lighter  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 01:14, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

You got the color perfect. Maybe blur the haunch shading. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   22:17, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred shading as much as much as i could  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 22:25, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, just lighten the back shading a little. Icefall Icy Winds 20:37, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Er how do i lighten it?  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 00:52, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Go over it with the dodge tool, and maybe set the dodge's strength down a bit to 30 or 20. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   03:09, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it ok?  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 19:29, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  06:20, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Moss (Q) - For Approval
There are four discussions and two declined images, so this is technically under the limit. Anyway, it was my birthday four days ago:D -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 14:52, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Happy beleated birthday, Hawk! :) This image is lovely. All I see is that a highlight could be added on the face and tail. Icefall  Icy Winds 14:55, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Icestorm:) Added highlights to the face and tail. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö      15:05, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Your birthday was four days ago? Wow, mine was five days ago. Happy belated birthday, Hawk. :) Image-wise, blur the highlight on the stomach some. $   Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 15:49, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Happy belated birthday to you, too, Icy:D Blurred higlight on the midsection. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 19:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, mine was on May 29th. The shading on the back should be blurred some more. Icefall Icy Winds 20:02, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yeah, I probably missed a lot of people's birthdays so far this yearXD Blurred back shading. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 19:57, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Another senior warrior?
It's no secret I haven't been very active latly, and I'll tell you now, my participation over the summer is gonna be a little spotty.

With the project growing, perhaps it's time to add another senior warrior? I dunno who to nominate, though, or if it's a good idea. Bramble? Dark hallows 05:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think we should nominate Icestorm123. :D Frostheart♥ 13:52, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Do you want to resign from the position, Shady? If so, I think that another senior warrior would probably be needed. I believe I'd want either Nightshine or Icestorm123; both have been here a long time and know a good deal about art. Are there other comments on this? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 14:43, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I agree completely with you Bramble. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   16:34, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I know which one I'll vote for. The other one I don't hink will suit the job. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:54, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Not resigning, no. I'm just goning to be pretty busy over the summer. At least over July I'll be gone a lot. Dark hallows 20:33, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Than do you want to move this to the nominations? This may be a bad idea, but we could nominate a set of users, and the one to get more votes could become a SW. Just a suggestion. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   03:08, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A) - For Approval
I put this up for approval again. I really hope it's under the limit. So anyways, here's my first Charart. Comments? I am also really clumsy when it comes to counting

things. I counted all the images up for approval five times and I got 34. If I missed one, please don't get angry! It's just that I have terrible counting skills when there are a lot of things.

Cherryfur123 17:55, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good, it's under the limit if you don't count the discussions. Anyways, he looks fine. Lighten the stripes, blur the shading and highlights, fill in the white pixels on the tail, make the ear pink bigger, and add a pupil into the eye. He's very good for your first try! Icefall Icy Winds 01:00, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it. It's great for your first try. Just do the things that Icefall said. S u n s p i r i t Gotta Lo ve New leaf 05:13, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are very bright. Darken them a lot and blur the shading. The ear pink should be centered in the ear, so move it to the right more. There are a few light coloured stripes on the end of the tail. Add more stripes lower down on his forearms.-- Night s h i n e   R  05:59, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better?

Cherryfur123 12:27, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I added the pupil in the eye.

Cherryfur123 19:11, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. Darken the highlights more and add a few more stripes onto the haunch-- Night s h i n e   R  21:14, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I darkened the highlights and added some more stripes.

Nightshine, thanks for taking it out of thumbnail for me. Can someone tell me how so I could do it myself and not trouble anyone else to do it?

Cherryfur123 00:47, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

When you edit the page, click modify and then select Full Size. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   01:21, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D) - For Approval
This should be under the limit. Which is better? I used a different shading method for the second one-- Night s h i n e   R  02:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm...I'd say the second one? I don't know they're both really beautiful. <font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 03:25, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. I say the first one looks better. But if you pick any one, the shading is really dark. I'd say lighten it and brighten/add a highlight on the muzzle. Icefall Icy Winds 17:59, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I like the first one. But I would add that the shading could be blurred a touch. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   23:10, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I used the first one and fixed up the shading-- Night s h i n e   R  23:16, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Alt K) - For Approval
There are six discussions, so this is under the limit. Comments? -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 20:10, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I luv it. The ear is the right pink and the pelt color is perfect!!!! Totallytawnypelt99 22:17, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   22:36, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading and darken the ear pink a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 22:56, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 23:12, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! The ear pink doesn't really match her warrior image though. Darken the shading under the chin a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  06:19, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

member?
Can I join??? I'v already got amberclaw ready :) Raffyjack123 22:26, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

You'll probably be added soon, but another user already has Amberclaw for approval. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   22:29, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh cool! But i was proud of that pic :( Is there another ginger tom that needs doing? I could swap it for that. Raffyjack123 22:44, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Its declined anyway So can mine be the charart? Raffyjack123 22:46, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

No, it is not declined. It is up for approval. I'll have to check for ginger toms. . . Mo    us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   23:03, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Alt) (W) - Declined
I counted the number of images, and this is under the limit. I didn't add tabby stripes because not all ginger cats have tabby stripes (like Quickpaw and Russetfur). I'm not sure if this is the correct filename or not, and I don't know if the ginger is too bright or not. Comments and suggestions? $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 23:47, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Does he need to have an alternative warrior image?-- Night s h i n e   R  23:48, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good! Just darken the shading on the tail. Icefall Icy Winds 23:49, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think so, because he's a ginger tom and his images look more of a brownish color. I'll get to darkening the shading soon. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 23:59, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add tabby stripes? Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   00:14, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Er... I said above that I didn't add tabby stripes because not all of the images have them, but if you really think I should add them then I'll try to. Does anyone else think I should add tabby stripes? $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 01:50, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Question; what's the point of this as an alternate image? Alternates are to show different genders or entirely different descriptions. I'm pretty sure Rowanclaw was only ever described as ginger... the alternate should be like his original warrior image, except it should be female. That being because he was a female cat at least in Midnight and Moonrise. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 01:53, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I thought that Rowanclaw was only described as ginger, too, but his images looked more of a brown color than a ginger color on my computer. It had come up when I put Rowanclaw's apprentice image up for approval (here) that it was possible we would have an alternate ginger version for Rowanclaw some time later, so I thought that it was needed. If they're a ginger color and it's just that I can't tell, then this should probably be declined. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 02:06, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nice thought, and I understand where you're coming from. The original artist, Dawnfeather, put forth that all ginger cats have tabby stripes and they are a more light brown cross gold color in real life. I think instead of an alternate, which would probably confuse people into thinking both versions were seen in the books, that we should modify the approved versions to get a more vibrant ginger. Not in this Tweak Week, but maybe in future. We'll have to see; are you all right that this can be declined? I just don't see how it could be used appropriately. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 02:24, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's alright. Thanks, and I'll go ahead and decline it and archive it in a little bit. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 14:42, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oakheart (A)
Frostcloud gave it to me because she didn't want it anymore. Comments? Frostheart♥ 02:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Frost, Oakheart was never acually seen as an apprentice Night  Fall 03:15, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (D) - For Approval
Okay, I've counted three times, so I'm pretty sure this is under the limit. How does he look? I'm kind of happy with how he turned out. Now I know the earpink doesn't match his other images, and I can change that, but I thought this pink looked more appropriate, so that's why I used it. I'd be fine with changing it, though. I've been studying his leader images and taking a look at what Skydragon's done on his warrior images, and I've worked hard on this guy. I copied the pelt, tabby stripe, and eye color shades from his leader image. I don't nkow about some of the stripes on him, though. I might tweak them later. So anyway, comments? Constructive criticism? Holly dapple  04:59, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! Darken the tail shading a bit, it looks flat right now. Darken the forearm that is farther from us.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:15, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. Brighten the highlights and darken the stomach shading. Icefall Icy Winds 11:47, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nettlekit - For Aproval
Nettlekit! Yay first charart!!! Any comments? Raffyjack123 11:37, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay,This is over the limit, you can not put this up untill SkyClan's Destiny is released,and you forgot to sign.It is very good, but sorry Raffy, it will have to be declined. OMG...You killed It! 11:01, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok :( sorry but I'll try to get to it when the book comes out! By the way how do you delete it from the WW gallery? Raffyjack123 11:37, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Gothstar (L) For Approval
Ok. There are a few things wrong with this: The image itself is excelent, but you need to join the project first. You don't need to be nominated, someone will add you and decline the image.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 13:51, June 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) This is not a real character.
 * 2) You're not a member of the project.

Gothstar.jpg
Here we go! My first charart, EVER! Hopefully it's great! If it is, please nominate me as an apprentice for the Art Project! Thanx, Gothstar45 P.S., it's for everyone to view, and it's a symbol

of me!

Gothstar (A) For Approval
Hi again! This is my second charart today! You can check if there are any mistakes that should be fixed, or if there are no mistakes at all. You can post them on my talk page. Any comments? Gothstar45 14:08, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Again, this is not a character in any of the books, and you're not a member of the project, so this will be declined and please stop posting these Chararts of Gothstar.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 14:13, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

First, this is not a character in the books. Second, you can only have one image up for approval. Third, you aren't a member of this project. Icefall Icy Winds 14:14, June 17, 2010 (UTC)