Talk:Firestar

Concerns
This article is now working towards silver grade. (But this list will probably also work for Gold prep...)

Current

 * Firestar's Quest section is lacking in information, and barely details his role in the book. Needs to be fixed.
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Forest of Secrets history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Rising Storm history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the A Dangerous Path history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Darkest Hour history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Midnight history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Moonrise history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Dawn
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Starlight
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Twilight
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Sunset
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Sight history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Dark River history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Outcast history
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Rise of Scourge history
 * Move the Rise of Scourge section to be in the correct approximate chronological location
 * Cite Family
 * Cite lives

Older

 * Improve writing style and flow of the Into the Wild History
 * Improve writing style and flow of the Fire and Ice history
 * Expand Outcast History, it's currently a very sparse.
 * Information from Fire and Ice should be cleaned up. It is a touch long at the moment.
 * Information from Rising Storm should be cleaned up. It is a touch long at the moment.
 * Information from Twilight should be cleaned up, it's nothing more than a series of disconnected single sentence paragraphs.
 * Expand Rise of Scourge History, it's currently a very sparse.
 * Information from Into the Wild should be cleaned up. It is a touch long at the moment.
 * Information from Firestar's Quest should be cleaned up. It's a bit long now.
 * New Prophecy Section is rather sparse and could use expansion.
 * Information from Firestar's Quest is currently missing.

Rise of Scourge
He never appears in tRoS. -- &Sigma;ul&atilde;l&iacute;&atilde; ( T – C – G ) 20:18, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * He doesn't appear by name, but it's obvious that he is there, since, at that part in tDH, he is there, and this is the exact same time/place, only a different book.-- &Sigma;ul&atilde;l&iacute;&atilde; undefined 13:01, 26 August 2008 (UTC)

New Prophecy and Rising Storm
Hi! I just wanted to let people know I did the task of shortening Rising Storm and making the entries in The New Prophecy longer. Do you think we need Power of Three articles longer too?
 * The Power of Three needs to be atleast 3 or 4 sentences.--JayfeatherTalk 17:06, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * That's what I thought too. I'll get right on it!--Jakko123 17:09, 29 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Yeah, great jb, Jakko!

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Error in The Sight (Warriors)
Hey, is it just me or did I see an error in book one of the Power of Three series on the second last paragraph of page 325 it said Firestorm instead of Firestar?

Rainbowstar 01:40, 4 November 2008

Ha you're right. I saw it. --Spottedwing 02:05, 7 November 2008 (UTC)Spottedwing

OMG, you're right! I'll put it in the misprints forum. G B 02:16, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

Father??
Somebody came out and said Sunstar was the father of Firestar and Scourge. Where did it say that?User:Mallinois 23:38, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

How many lives?
I was just wondering, should this article list how many lives Firestar has left? In FQ, Firestar has 6 lives, and he loses one. Subtract the tree in Dawn, the fox trap in Sunset, and the greencough in Long Shadows, and I believe he has one life left.- annonymous guest

No, that's not how it goes. G B 39 23:48, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Your math is off. He has 2 lives left, if everything you say is true. Graystripe 17:53, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

Actually, revealed on a chat(link is on here), Firestar has less lives than we think and the Erins are making huge hints he'll die in Sunrise... --Mal <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">lin ois  18:11, 2 January 2009 (UTC)