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TWEAK/REDO NOMINATIONS ARE CURRENTLY: OPEN/ CLOSED, BARRING THE NOMINATIONS ALREADY POSTED (see the list below for images to tweak or redo)

=Nominations= If you wish to nominate an image, you link the image (like so - ) underneath the appropriate subheading, and list the reason(s) you wish it to be redone/tweaked. Project members with the ranking of warrior or above can vote, and only five votes are necessary for the vote to pass or fail.

Sol (Alt Rogue 2) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Sol.rogue.alt2.png He was called a mottled black and brown tom with white patches in the forgotten warrior page 97 (?) im not sure about the page number so I need to double check. Frankly I think he gets white patches on this alt. I could be wrong, though. If this passes, can I have it if Skye doesn't want it? 05:14, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm not actually sure why he has this alt, black and brown are both in his description already?? it seems like a partial to me. 05:17, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry for swiping all of these, but this alt is extremely special to me and I will be taking it. This is to me what Ivypool's warrior and Mapleshade's rogue alt are to Ivystripe. It's one of my favorite and one of my earliest images.
 * I checked, there is no mention of white patches on that page. Also, it counts as a partial as his description has mottled, black and dark brown. 05:47, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * it was page 97 whoops 05:48, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * Skt, he's a tortie - there's a difference between that and mottled black and brown, I'm pretty sure. 12:11, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * ^ 15:09, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * ok but have you ever seen a tortie that isn't a mostly white one? ._. 15:13, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * If this warrents, then he needs to be tweaked. 07:59, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * 20:25, March 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * he was called this in Forgotten Warrior page 91, but the cite in his description for mottled is same book page 99. I'm confused with this. 05:41, March 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * sorry but I disagree. We have always done alts as they were described on that page. We don't just add white if it has been in their previous descriptions. He was called a mottled on that page not a tortie. Agreeing with David partially. 14:14, March 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * he was called white patched on that page 15:29, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Cody (Q) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Cody.kittypet.png First off, the base pelt color is different than the other pictures in her set. Also I think the shading could be defined plus the strips (just like on here) could be smuged more. I'd like this if it passes. 19:42, March 15, 2015 (UTC)  File:Cody.queen.png Okay whoops lets see here. The base color should match the KP and the stripes could be brought out a tad more. Beebs wants this so woo~ 23:31, March 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * the KP was made first so the queen should be the one tweaked 22:46, March 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Mmhmm- tweak the queen.
 * then should I change the title to this or make a whole new post for the queen? 23:24, March 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * just change it, yo, and as the OA I'd like the queen. one thing though - would you nominate it for shading or nah? I think it's fine as it is - 23:25, March 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think shading is fine for the queen. 23:31, March 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Gotcha. Define 'brought out' for me, though? 23:33, March 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * I guess 'defined' would be a better would actually lol. Like how the stripes seem more defined in the kittypet but it's only a minor suggestion 00:06, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * aww really? I like the queen, the smudging makes the fur look more natural. 01:40, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * bolden is a good word too. ^.^ 14:20, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Graypool (K, A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Graypool.kit.pngFile:Graypool.apprentice.png These are a bit... color-off? I color picked. http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2i7s6yw&s=8 if you want to see this. I don't want this to be honest so the OA(s) can snag it if they want

File:Graypool.star.png etc except for the kit and apprentice: these need to be dark gray, so I think they can be darkened. I don't want any of these so feel free to snag them. 08:32, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * She's dark grey. I think the other images should be darkened. 08:39, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think the kit and apprentice can be lightened a tad (because they're almost looking black) and the rest darkened a tad. 08:58, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * I got the base from the other images. I want these. And honestly, you guys are being picky. They don't look black, and the base is actually from the StarClan, which I picked from an area that doesn't have shading. It's just how dark the shading is on those two images. They look as she should be- dark gray. If anything, I really think the warrior, queen, and StarClan image could be darkened- that's closer to neutral gray and she's supposed to be dark.
 * tbh I had a lot of doubts when nominating, because I thought the other images did look a little light, i think I should change the nomination now. 12:16, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * May I have the StarClan and queen then? 00:16, March 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * I want the starclan, it's my image. 18:45, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * if this passes could i have the warrior? 12:39 Thu Mar 19
 * If this passes I'd like the elder 07:56, March 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * 14:22, March 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * -- 18:16, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (K, W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Sharpclaw (SC).kit.png File:Sharpclaw.warrior.png Both are lighter in comparison to his other images. I'd like these if the OA doesnt mind.-- 18:22, March 20, 2015 (UTC)


 * the warrior’s shading can be defined as well. 22:52, March 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * these have been nominated before, I think. I wanted to nominate these once, but I realized it was only the use of highlights. At the same time, these two images could go with a tweak for the shading because they are really flat. 00:54, March 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * Pretty sure it's because of the shading and highlights.
 * though if this does passes, I'd like the kit as I am the OA. 01:05, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Stonefur ~Redo Nomination
File:Stonefur.apprentice.png etc. Soooo I would gladly repost this in the tweak section if everyone agrees that it's tweakable but none of them match each other very well. The colors are all different from each other and they vary in darkness too. The shading is also flat on the apprentice, warrior, kit and the deputy but the color is the main reason for the redo. If this passes can I have the set if the OAs don't mind 09:07, March 11, 2015 (UTC)


 * StarClanner's mine; I last tweaked it 10:00, March 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * will you be generous let me have the apprentice, sis? ^^ 12:45, March 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * I hate you but do as we discussed 13:07, March 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:46, March 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry, but they look like they match to me- the only variation would probably be because of the shading.
 * I color picked off from all the images and this is what I got. They are all different shades despite me picking off the lightest pixel I could find. I also noticed green linear art on the warrior. 06:20, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * 15:09, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * I honestly think they all could probably be tweaked. Nonetheless, if it passes I'd like to do the starclanner since I'm the OA. 20:06, March 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * fine w/ me Teldy
 * Agreeing with Jayce and Teldy on this one. They match on my phone, atleast. 04:12, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * They look fine to me. 10:22, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * easily tweakable 17:29, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * this is tweakable, and even then the only one that doesnt really match is the apprentice IMO. its a bit lighter than the others, at least on my phone. 12:31 Thu Mar 19
 * tweakable. 14:24, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

Redtail (Alt. Star) - Redo Nomination
File:Redtail.star.alt.png - probably gonna get shot for this one...  But since the tail lineart is getting tweaked with his original StarClan, this one will also need to get fixed. Also, after you pass the shoulders, the tabby pattern sorta goes downhill in terms of realism and just looks all kinds of weird that's bothered me for ages. None of the colors would change. As the OA, I want this. 06:14, March 16, 2015 (UTC)


 * 07:57, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * I didn't (a teeeeny bit) tweak the linear art to be honest 08:01, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * 08:59, March 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:02, March 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * Go for it. 04:10, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Perchpaw (BS) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Perchpaw (BS).apprentice.png Would like this if it passes. Anyways, the shading's hard to see, there's no clear light source, and the white looks grey and oversmudged. Since Rockett's gone there's no file to be given and therefore because of the amount of things needed to be tweaked it'd be better off redone 21:01, March 17, 2015 (UTC)


 * 21:53, March 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * No way... This looks gorgeous and its tweakable. 23:20, March 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * go for it 23:26, March 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * this is beautiful. It could go for a tweak with the shading but the white looks fine. 00:12, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * this is tweakable  00:53, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:01, March 18, 2015 (UTC)


 * Everything you just pointed out is easily tweakable. I personally really like this image, so it'd be pretty much pointless to redo the whole thing over small things like the shading/etc, which could be fixed without the file. 04:09, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * 10:22, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * 17:29, March 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm actually going to tie this vote up. I think it wouldn't do any harm to redo it.
 * sorry but it can be tweaked. 14:28, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

=Approved Tweaks= Once an image is under this heading, it may be reserved on the project main page and crossed out with a and a. The image may only be removed from this list when it is approved and archived.

All project leaders are to keep track of the number of images on this list, including those that are crossed out. Should the number rise above 50, nominations will close and remain closed until the number of images on the list is down to 40.

Tweaks

 * File:Briarlight.kit.png - needs to be darker (Reserved to Breeze until 18th March)
 * File:Briarlight.warrior.png - needs to be darker (Reserved to Skye until 18th March)
 * File:Pod.loner.png -shading needs depth and definition. (Reserved to Tigger until March 23)
 * File:Seedpaw.apprentice.png- redo shading (Reserved to Stealth until 22nd March)

Redos

 * File:Redtail.star.png - patches need to be smudged more, tail lineart needs to be tweaked, shading needs defining
 * File:Sandstorm.apprentice.alt.png - Pixely stripes, icky shading (Reserved to Sorrel until March 23rd)
 * File:Mousefang.star.png- Many issues (Reserved to Skye until 19th of March)
 * File:Mousefang.kit.png- Many issues (Reserved to Beebs until 19th of March)