Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Berrynose (Alt A) ~ Redone
OAs be Loonie and Howl, redone because the patches were smudged unrealistically. Comments? Bb un   legs  18:09, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and the patches on the back 00:29, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Decided to tint his shading, too. Bb un   legs  00:33, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Also found some whisker waste, too. Bb un   legs  00:36, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Possibly lighten the back leg shading some. Or add a highlight, right now they look flat. 03:16, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

The legs furthest from us look blue? Pretty sure they shouldn't really be /blue/. ._. Even with a tint, it shouldn't be that bad.

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  18:48, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Better! Although I would potentially even have a darker spot along the edges or something to make it look more 3D like, just don't go overboard xD. You're becoming great with the fur texture, but the texture on the spot on the leg nearest to us should curve more so it looks more natural and adds to the depth. The lowest spot on the hindleg nearest to us should probably also be going vertical or at least at an angle too. This looks great, Bbun! 03:36, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. I fixed up the patches, but I think the legs look fine xD. Thanks, Teldy!

I disagree, honestly. With the way the smudges are, they should probably be going as 'teldy said, at an angle or vertical.

With which? The patches or the legs? c: Bb  un   legs  14:35, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

The patch on the hindleg. The lowest spot. Also, the legs are still far too blue for my liking, and they appear to still be a solid color, which means the shading's extremely flat. Now, I'm no shading expert, but shouldn't there be some variation, even when the entire thing is supposed to be in darkness, to show which areas are closer to the light than others?

Re-up. Changes aren't showing, so look here. Bb  un   legs  14:52, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

The shading should be expanded a bit, especially on the chest. Also, it's probably a bit too blue. Try sticking it on a multiply layer, or if it's already on one, make the color closer to a lighter blue. 21:09 Sun Jun 9 2013

I actually think the chest shading is fine, but I'll make the color closer to a paler blue c: (However, if people disagree, I'll expand the chest xD) Bb  un   legs  21:15, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  22:10, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

While your shading color is fine, there is honestly no light source to the image. It is coming from different directions on the legs and face. Define one, please. 3:57 Mon Jun 10 2013

Furzepelt (A) - Withdrawn
OAs were Loonie and Shelly. Redone for multiple reasons. Comments? I officially now hate doing shading on apprentice blanks. Dx  17:45, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

She looks really really gray. Lighten the base pelt, perhaps? Or try adding some highlights?

Re-uploaded The base pelt is pure white and she has highlights, but I redid the shading to see if that helped. x3  18:20, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Not sure if I'm seeing the wrong version or not, but she still looks pretty gray. Maybe expan the highlights? 23:33, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:11, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

She's looking rather grey - fix that? 03:46 Sat Jun 8

Re-uploaded 14:22, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:05 Sun Jun 9 2013

I'm withdrawing this, becauese I'm gonna be on vacation starting tomorrow, and I know I won't have time for it. x3 21:12, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

May I take over, please? c: Bb  un   legs  21:13, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt A) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart. Redone because stripes weren't realistic and stuffs. I tried to match the other image and fix the stripes but it was kinda hard, and I did ask if people were okay with me doing something else, and they said it was cool, so don't complain please. Changes might not be showing because Wikia's a spaz sometimes.

Woo~ Sexy c: Can you thicken and darken the shading? 21:44, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm... I actually think it's good as-is, but if someone else agrees, that's cool with me.

I actually think the shading on the body could be defined just a wee bit. Another job well done, Skye! You never fail to impress me, especially with tabbies c: Bb  un   legs  23:46, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay Beebs specified where on the body so yeah. Changes are being horrid so yeah here ya go. Also define the feet shading on all four because reasons.