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Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
My first charart! Yay! Picture: Darkstripe when he was described with a dark gray pelt. Comments? Lu c k y   H e a r t  o f  a  l i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. And take the amber eye from his warrior image :3 22:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, so this will have to be declined. Sorry. :( 22:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is the right number now. Define the shading on the tail. 22:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the back leg (the one far away from us) needs shading. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">!  22:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :) Make the eye pupil (the black part) bigger. Also have less shading on the tail tip, or put highlights. 22:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is a female blank, use a male blank. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:46, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll improve it. Sorry Maple took the wrong blank <:3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know if the changes are showing yet... <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:54, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't he already HAVE an alt? Or is that for the black pelt? Also, blur the shading. 22:59, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the pupil and reposition/ blur the ear-pink. 23:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

@cloudskye Black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

He already has a black alt. This needs to be a silver tabby. And I fixed the title for you. 23:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There are actually four alt decriptions of Darkstripe: black, gray, silver tabby, and black with silver stripes (opposite of his real description). Pick one of the three that aren't done. 23:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll do silver tabby, since I already started that :P <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:23, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing he needs an alt for is being ark grey. He is everything else already. Ill decline alll the others. 23:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm confused :( This is a dark gray alt. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:48, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Nevermind, I'm just sticking with this. This is a dark gray alt, not a black one. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  00:04, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sotty. You had just originally said that he was black. 00:17, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kind of small.. Do you have the right sized blank? (or is it just me x3) If its the correct size then blur the shading a bit more. :3 Mi  st  y!  00:33, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I never said he was black! And the changes aren't showing yet. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  01:09, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah fix the highlights and darken the ear pink Good for a try! 03:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yay the changes are actually showing. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  11:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink by blurring it. It's too blotchy. Also, lighten the shading on the paws/legs. :3 12:57, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the title for ya ;3. And darken the highlights. 15:24, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  15:48, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

make the ear pink bigger and darker and also turn down the higjlights on the body and make the one on the face brighter too 22:25, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

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Highlights are fine, Sandstorm. They just need to be to be blended with the shading more. 05:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur hightlights around a little, good work. I'm working on the silver tabby now. :-) Leaf-storm,20:00,September 27,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry, forgot to say re-uploaded before xD <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:40, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights and define the earpink. 22:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  16:15, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it just a tad more. And maybe try and make the ear pink a tad lighter. Other then taht this is beauitful. Though if you have dodge you can use that to lighten it. Just a helpful tip. :D Rain  face &lt;3 18:55, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing yet. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  19:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 19:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  00:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and lighten the shading on the chest. Looking good! 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good, blur the neck shading (if any, it looks like it though) a tad more. Rain face &lt;3 19:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n21:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight. 22:54, October 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Other than that, looking good! 08:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! :3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 22:10, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still looks blotchy. Try blurring it a little more. 20:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, his shading is kinda covering the shoulder highlights. Please define the highlights on the shoulder where the shading is covering it. (a lot of words, and yes, i speak fast and type fast :P) Rain  face &lt;3 21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded So far so good (in my opinion ^-^). <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 21:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still blotchy, blur the the shading. 16:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink (is there any earpink at all?) and round out the haunch highlight. Also move the shoulder highlight up. <span style="">23:42 Sun Oct 9

Re-uploaded Yes, there is ear-pink. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y    <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 14:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC) a lot Brighten the earpink more and blur the shading/highlights a lot more. Maybe take the earpink colour from Silverstream's current image if you're having trouble. <span style="">21:36 Mon Oct 10

There's not much to comment on except define the earpink (a lot :P) Good job, Lucky. This is really good. :) 21:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks, Twilight :D <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y    <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 22:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, and blur the shading more. 01:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and smooth the shading and highlights; they're really blotchy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:58, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define your light source. The shading on the haunch is inconsistent with the rest of the shading on him and shouldn't be at the bottom, but rather in the middle of his haunch. 15:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. 17:15, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you're smudging the shading einstead of blurring. 07:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * instead 07:53, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm blurring. And since I gotta go, I will work on this the day after tomorrow (maybe) because my dad will be on tomorrow.

The shading is extremely blotchy. Make the highlights larger, define the light source, and blur the highlights. 22:29, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, more pink, define it, and blur it. 15:01, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading on the back is really thick and where is the light sorce? The highlights just seem randomly placed. Tone them down more and blur it. It's blotchy. 17:14, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 22:26, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a week since the last reupload. Shouldn't it be declined? 13:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, this is declined due to lack of work. Anyone without a current normal project may take this over. 16:18, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

May I do it?

Yes. 17:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Thank You I will get started now.

Reuploaded So can someone change it from Declined to For Approval I would've done it but i wasn't sure if i was allowed to. And I know the earpink is horrible.

Changed it. Maybe blur the ear-pink more and define it also. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  18:50, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ugggg my earpink is such a fail.

Center the ear pink and darken the shading. 23:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink larger and darken the ear pink 01:33, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder/chest highlight. 20:52, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The ear pink is too pink and way too small. Try to darken it too. Blur everything and smudge the highlights into the shading more. 19:38, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 16:35, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

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Redden the earpink and define the pupil. <span style="">18:54 Sat Oct 22

Center the ear pink as well. 22:57, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the earpink but the eyes won't cooperate with me so i will do it at a different time.

Blur the shading more on the shoulder and haunch. 00:57, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the shading. -- 02:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

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Can the highlight (if you have highlights) be made a but bigger and also darkened a little? . 23:46, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 01:10, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the ear-pink once you define it also. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:45, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

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Okay. The highlights are too small and need to be dulled. It looks like there is no shading, so fix that. 03:24, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I would suggest you re-do them. Try using Fuzzy Circle Size 50. 21:34, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the ear pink pinker. 01:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wait what is fuzzy circle 50? Is it on pixlr because that is what i use.. And i can't change the earpink...

If you use pixlr, you wont find it there. Why can't you change the earpink?? (just asking) Try to blur where the shading meets on the head highlights.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  17:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

oh yeah when i do try to change it it reverts to my original form so i would have lost a lot of work and ok <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 19:32, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights and blur the shading. If you're talking about the wiki, it just takes a bit for the changes to show because we have so many useless images on here. 19:37, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

wait does darken the highlights mean actually making them darker or putting more highlights in? Sorry i sound so dumb XD. And im not talking about the wiki my computer is just being dumb.....

Let me help Cloudy out: she means that your highlights are too bright, so by making them darker, they won't be so bright. Does that help? =)  03:05, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah that helps a lot Ivy =) Thanx. And reuploaded!

I can't see the shading on this.. Can you darken it? :3  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  19:29, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more. 20:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval


Ok, second charart. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:15, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, noticed i forgot the ear pink, i'll fix that. Rain face &lt;3 19:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Add nose-pink, blue the highlights, and make them smaller, make the shading larger, and define it, and blur the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, is the black supposed to be shading? If so, please lighten it and blur it. It looks like a whole other tone to the fur. The nose should be dark gray, since Blackclaw is a black cat. 19:24, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur, blur and blur some more. Also, did you get the eye color from either the warrior or elder images? It seems a little off. 19:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this one was a TOTAL fail. gonna re-do it so i can make the shading right and... yea. Everything that you guys said. Rain face &lt;3 19:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Crud monkies! forgot to blur. What else will i forget today? Rain face &lt;3 20:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 20:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better ^-^ Now make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 22:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Take the pelt color from one of his other images, this is a bit too light. Looking great though! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 01:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at it for a REALLY long time (actually, it was only like, 30 seconds :P) and I can't find anything i could complain about. it looks purrfect:P<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 20:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the nose needs to be darker than the pelt, so it should be almost as dark as the lineart. Also, define the shading and blur the earpink more. 21:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks bluey. '''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 23:01, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur blur and blur more (the shading. Everywhere) 01:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 02:22, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to lighten the shading, it looks blacker then it should be. Blend it in with the pelt some more as well. 22:41, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image a bit; right now I can't even tell the lineart from the pelt colour. <span style="">22:40 Thu Oct 6

The shading looks weird. Blend it with the highlights. For an example of a black kit, look at Hollyleaf's kit image (remade by me, funnily enough). 19:50, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my cpu stopped working. I will get started on it. Question, how did you make the chest so bright though? Rain face &lt;3 16:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind. I had to use gimp for it. Re-uploaded. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and also add some earpink. (Hope it's the right one...) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and Treat 05:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope i got it all. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  12:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rain, this is fabulous! Define the earpink a little. I wish I could do a black cat like this one. 20:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, defined more. Thanks Ivy, though i think that you can do amazing black cats also. *gives a hug so she will feel better* Any way, comments? Rainfacestar Vampire time!  01:20, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I think this still looks completely black. It needs to be lightened a lot and then the shading needs to be darkened. <span style="">06:17 Mon Oct 10

Dude, it's not black. It's the dark-gray from the other image. I won't fix it unless someone else argues about it. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  10:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it. It's not completely black, but it's still too dark. 15:28, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you brighten the ear pink just a tad? Not a lot, though. I'm very picky with ear pink.. xD 01:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 06:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think the changes are showing, i only defined the ear-pink a bit so... yea. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  10:38, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Take the ear pink right from his elder or warrior images. They're not the same. 19:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  18:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading/highlights. 22:19, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. 14:55, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  19:29, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and there is a bit of waste on the outside of the neck. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:26, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Think i got it all and blurred the shading. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  00:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The edges of the ear pink come down onto the face. Move them, and the blur the ear pink. 22:28, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *sigh* ear-pink is not my thing, is it? Any way, Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  22:50, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard, I know. Make the ear pink a little more triangular. 22:52, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for understanding Cloudy. Okay, made it more triangular without it touching the lineart. I really do not like ear-pink any more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  23:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looking great so far. Extend the highlights (Or have less shading) on the tail. 19:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the legs is a lot darker then the rest of the shading. I don't think that's supposed to be like that. Make it a tad bit lighter. 21:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, changes aren't showing. They are on the file page, so, look there and Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  22:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Theres waste around the charart get rid of it. 23:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! [ 19:39, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular. 20:51, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  00:26, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and the shading between the front legs. 21:29, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, move the earpink into the ear more and blur it.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:40, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. Or smudge the bottom of it into the top of it. 16:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading a little more. 01:00, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Follow the rest of the comments regarding earpink, then make it a little more pink. Lighten it. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:48, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry for not working on this for a while, i was first at a camp-out (no internet service) and then i was at a sleep-over party last night and i just got back. i am gonna work on this. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  20:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the legs and bottom of the tail looks alot darker than the rest of the shading, could you lighten it or blurr it? . 23:48, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the bottom of the tail. 01:13, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:41, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading. 20:43, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed, and also make the ones on it's sides thinner, they stick out pretty far into the stomach. . 22:02, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights. 23:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Don't really know quite how to explain this, but the head and chest shading look, kinda, akward. 22:35, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a lot. 01:50, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

ACtually you sould redden it. Also You need tomkae the nose a touch bit lighter. Good job! 02:24, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is it really that hard to take a dropper tool and color pick from his elder/warrior image? 02:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail and all the paws. 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy, i was gone for the week and forgot to notify you all so i never got to tell you all. Gosh. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  01:42, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There you go, Rain. Hope it's good for you! 02:24, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Unless the changes aren't showing, I can't really see it. 03:58, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink while you're at it. <span style="">09:35 Mon Oct 31

Well, i tried. Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  20:27, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and darken the nose. 22:13, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (Q) ~ For Approval
Finally snagged a queen :P Comments? 19:27, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink a little bit Leaf-storm,19:28,October 15,2011 (UTC)

I'll wait for a second opinion on that, since I used the ear pink color from her images. 19:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least lighting the shading on the belly. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  19:34, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the earpink, and blur the shading some more. 19:38, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a little. 23:11, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten all the shading. Add depth to the eye. 23:12, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is a lighter color pixel on the left front paw, blur the shading. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:35, October 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded  12:10, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wind's eyes in her leader charart have a ring of orange in them, which I think makes her stand out in an interesting way. I think you should try to match that. 17:04, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''You'll have to zoom in to see it. 20:31, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The orange was on the outer part, and it was a bold orange... sorry, poking at it. 01:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the ear-pink a tad. 19:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes aren't showing yet 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why should I blur it more? I think it seems fine. 20:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, you will blur the shading more if a more experienced member tells you to. I agree. It needs to have a nice, smooth transition between the lighting planes and blurring it makes this transition looks natural. I know that you're liscensed to have your artistic creativity, but as another fellow artist, I can see that it needs blurred. 21:07, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Even though it seems I didn't blur it, I did. 23:03, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Should I make it more to the color of her ears or just darken it in general? 20:16, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's supposed to be the same as the ear pink.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:17, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes are showing. 21:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Making a small bump. 20:05, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to be the same as the ear-pink, as long as it's not a black cat or anything, which this clearly isn't. Any way, blur and lighten the shading right next to the front arm closes to use. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! [ 20:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading along her back. 20:45, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose color are the same Dark. I took the color from the middle of her ear. And I'll get to it Speckle. 20:55, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok the changes aren't showing. Shading the back is tough D: 21:19, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the tail and blur the shading. 22:31, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Make the pupil skinner. 00:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be some white in the eye as well? 16:29, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll work on this soon. And there is Shadewing. 20:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is a black square in her eye........Otherwise nice job! <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:27, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the shading looks too dark so that parts of the pelt looks brown. Also blur and smudge the ear pink. 00:17, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear oink and define the shading on the tail. 01:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading on this is making me angry ._. I'll live x3. 12:46, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and this will be ready. 22:16, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Safe to say I'm satisfied with the shading for once ^^. 23:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The eye away from us needs a white dot or summin. Otherwise I think it looks good. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 10:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)'''

Blur the ear-pink. 13:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:51, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. <span style="">00:26 Wed Oct 26

Reuploaded -- 11:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot what defien means x_x Sorry for the blonde moment. 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading easier to see. =) 20:45, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:00, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the stomach near the front foot needs to be lightened please. :3 . 22:05, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and face. 10:56, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Blurred it, but it doens't look like it D: -- 12:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It may be me, but I am kind of confused with your light source. You have the lighter shading on this side of the head <--- but on the body, you seem to have the light source coming from directly in front. O.o 22:20, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it a bit larger. 01:53, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did as you said Squirrel. I'm used to shading that way, and I used one of the shading styles to shade it. 19:11, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the belly some more? 00:16, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse ._. 11:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur it some more..

However, it looks odd to me because the light source seems to be coming at two angles. I'd say that you should move the light source on the head to our right a little. Someone can correct me if they think it looks fine. 22:20, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (Alt.L2) - For Approval
Ok, I tried match him correctly but I stopped on the stripes. I made him a bit looking like on the covers..please tell me you dont decline this! Leaf-storm,9:18,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Ah! This is beautiful. Make the earpink less purple. <span style="">10:50 Sun Oct 16

Reuploaded - Leaf-storm,11:08,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Add shading. 13:49, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Would he need scars too? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 13:51, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. At least, I would think so. 14:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded, and that scars and torn ear? Leaf-storm,15:00,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes the same color even in the highlights, they look brighter in those places. -- 20:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit more brown. Otherwise this is amazing <3. -- 21:19, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the colors don't really match those on the cover, his base pelt is cream in color and his stripes are darker and don't have that much red in them. 22:38, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, the Ear-pink is to bright and neon pink, darken it and make it more natral? :) . 02:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, i cant match everything but I try... Leaf-storm,13:16,October 17,2011 (UTC)

You can color-pick off of the cover (that's what I did for Millie), at the very least, darken the stripes and make them less red colored. I know you try hard and that's not my point. 13:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I take colour from cover.. Im working on it now Leaf-storm,16:34,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Epic FAIL! Leaf-storm,17:04,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the stripe above his nose. 17:21, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,18:29,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink smudges. 19:15, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

yawn* Im sleeping on my keyboard...Whats? I was thinking they're look good..ok reuploaded Leaf-storm,19:27,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Whoah whoah, wha-? We're doing teh manga alts now? - 22:04, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

@BlueOrca: Yep. Haven't you seen Milie's loner and kittypet manga alts up?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 23:05, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple and more red and blur all the stripes; make sure they're all the same colour, too. Right now it looks like you forgot to change the colour of a couple stripes (mostly on the tail) <span style="">02:09 Tue Oct 18

reuploaded Leaf-storm,17:38,October 18,2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink. 23:37, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur and smudge the stripes and maybe dark it slightly. Make the ear pink darker and tone it done. Also blur everything 01:37, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't repeat what's already been said. You don't need to say blur twice. >.>;; 01:47, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon, maybe take the color from another approved one. Sand, Bro, would ya quit saying to smudge already? Its doesnt really need to unless its really needed and the stripes are dark enough - 01:52, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

ear-pink, my biggest problem xD Leaf-storm,15:04,October 19,2011 (UTC)

I really like the colors on this it is awsome but yes i agree with the others about ear pink. Ac orn  fur 01:08, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should darken the shading. Nice stripes! 22:37, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,12:20,October 21,2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink slightly and try to smudge the pelt into the ear pink slightly. Good job! 16:08, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste right outside the bottom of the haunch in front. 16:26, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded, Shadewing, ehm..what? Leaf-storm,17:36,October 22,2011 (UTC)

There's the smallest bit of waste between where the tail begins and the haunch. It's the small corner. 17:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think I not found it... anything changed? Leaf-storm,18:41,October 22,2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink and make sure all the stripes are the proper colour. You missed several on the tail and legs. <span style="">21:31 Sat Oct 22

I would upload a version of it with the waste circled, but I don't think we're allowed anymore. It's right on the bottom, in between the leg and tail. Fill the background in white or neon, and you should see it. 23:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The right ear pink looks blurred into the face. Can you fix that? 01:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded, Its not blurred, Squirrelflame :-) Leaf-storm,8:51,October 23,2011 (UTC)

Fix where the stripes turn yellow (I believe because of highlights) on the tip of the tail, if I am looking at the correct revision. :3 -- 19:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Im blind xD Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:54,October 25,2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have scars...? Sorry if I'm wrong. -- 21:27, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I add them if the other says yes too Leaf-storm,8:27,October 27,2011 (UTC)

I think he should, it's part of his description. Plus, this is beautiful! . 22:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add scars, and darken the forehead a little please. 22:43, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded Leaf-storm 11:52,October 29,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the scars into the pelt some. -- 21:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the scars a little. They look too pink right now. 00:13, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm 11:48,October 30,2011 (UTC)

Add a small line of red to the middle of each scar to give them depth. <span style="">00:32 Mon Oct 31

Blur the scar above his nose. 10:35, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

reuploaded Leaf-storm 15:42,October 31,2011 (UTC)

Ooh, I like the texture of the scars ^.^ Darken the shading just a tad. -- 20:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded Leaf-storm 20:19,October 31,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more. 22:21, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) ~ For Approval
I hope this doesn't get declined. Anyways, I think Dappletail gets a queen image, according to the new rule. 00:07, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Good job! But blur the striped a bit more, define the earpink and lighten the shading just a tad on the white.
 * cries of the awesome beauty* The stripes need to be more orangy though. xD<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 00:10, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:27, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose look less whiteish, more pink. :) 00:31, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

You're right, she gets one under the new rule as she was mentioned with kits. Her earpink should be the same color as on the other chararts, though. 00:42, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. :) Blur the stripes more, lighten the earpink a tad. Wuahahaha! <font color="orange" style="background:black;"> Yup. I've been working on my evil laugh. &gt;:D  00:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse. 01:13, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Erase or thin out a few lines so they match the original image. <span style="">02:05 Tue Oct 18

I agree with Wildheart, the lines look too thick. . 03:56, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

When you fix the lines, blur them more too. -- 20:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blur, blur, and blur. -- 22:34, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the lines more. -- 10:57, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink. 20:31, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a front white paw?

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  20:50, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh derp, yeah. I erased it while I was fixing the stripes. And Speckle, I don't think I should. It's from the other images. -- 21:23, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the era pink. 21:42, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I also agree that the earpink should be made more visible. The tail needs some highlights as well. It looks really nice!! 22:49, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back paws, please. :3 -- 04:19, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so lazy :P -- 20:12, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paws, and she needs a front left white paw. 20:47, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Xcf. files changed my skills :P -- 20:58, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Try to separate the stripes more because they look to...close together. Also smudge the stripes and ear pink. Also darken the ear pink the slightest bit. 23:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

You need to lighten the ear pink, not darken it. Take it right from her elder image. 03:14, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the stripes and the earpink. -- 12:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's stripes going out, erase those. xD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 12:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

After you erase the waste, blur the stripes more.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:41, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Derp. -- 12:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Define the earpink. 16:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the stripes a tad and make them more orange so they match her elder image. <span style="">19:09 Sat Oct 22

Her stripes kind of look like they are fading from left to right. Also, are there stripes on the legs? If not, add them. 23:32, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a tad. 01:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. -- 20:31, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes. <span style="">00:13 Mon Oct 24

Reuploaded I redid it. -- 12:07, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The paw i belive is supposed to be white and make it slightly longer and blur it too. 00:42, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her white paw.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded HUZZAH! -- 12:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. This is doing good though. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:49, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Don't think I should Rain, I took her earpink color from her elder image. 11:45, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I may be wrong, but shouldn't the stripes be defined a bit? . 22:08, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think your looking at the wrong image... I can see the stripes clearly. -- 22:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. Excellent job :) CBA? 20:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Could you saturate the stripes a bit more so they match the elder image better? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:23, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as if there is a big blob of brown near her shoulder.. Could you fix that??

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Spread the stripes out and make them more uneven to match her other images. 12:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made it worse D: -- 15:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

No you didn't. Join up some of the stripes, and look at the stripes on her other images. They get thicker and thinner and some bits are brighter than others. Try to replicate that. 19:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter. Also, possibly lighten the shading on the haunch? 00:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading along the face, neck and shoulders. -- 20:14, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar Alt. (D) ~ For Approval
Okay, so, I do realize the shading looks stiff and un-blurred, but i've blurred it to the max on GIMP. Also, The tawny reference is from Oakhearts tawny color, and i've posted a cite on Leopardstar's page already. Comments? :S. 01:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename the file Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png and put delete tags on the other images you uploaded. Add some shading under the jaw and brighten the earpink. <span style="">01:10 Tue Oct 18

How do I add an image when it's in source mode? :S. 01:18, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

On the bar (where you would get your signature) press the button that looks like a picture fame, and then put the name of the file into the part where it says: "Example.jpg". ^-^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay...Reuploaded Thanks. . 01:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

nooo, name it Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png(its case sensative) :|- 01:52, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oi. That was....way too much work. It shouldn't have been like that. xD. 02:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

xD Redden the earpink as it almost blends in with the pelt. Maybe blur the edges of the shading, but otherwise this looks great! 02:19, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Again, way too much work. xD Anyway, fixing the charart itself was pretty easy. And BlueOrca, it should have been Leopardstar.deputy.alt2 becuase it just made another file of the first alt. :3 Reuploaded.. 02:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 18:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the head a bit. 20:11, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I think it reuploaded.. 00:40, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur shading. 00:56, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading? You should also define the shading on the tail and make the earpink smaller. 22:51, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the earpink. 12:20, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good. Lighten the shading and also smudge the ear pink and shading too. 16:09, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Omg this is so pretty! Just lighten the shading.

Lighten the ear pink a little. 01:18, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erm...I accidentially closed the tab and lost all my layers, i'm working on re-doing it. . 06:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Feather, you still working on this? I know you're redoing it and all, but you still only have 7 days, and you've taken 8 since your last reupload. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my gosh! I forgot all about this! I feel so ashamed now, Give me a moment and I'll have the new one up. . 22:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. There. Nobody has any idea how much I love this aside from the earpink. xD. 00:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. Hmm... This is interesting. I like it, Feather! 01:08, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Errmm..? Is this thing working? xD Re-uploaded. And Thanks Skye. :D. 01:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Beautiful! 10:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Thanks! Re-uploaded. 19:05, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The face highlights is much too light. Also where is your light source? It just looks randomly placed. O.o 02:26, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

That face highlight isn't a face highlight, it's a face face, like any other realistic cat. and I used the shading spots everyone else uses. . 03:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous Feather! Could you darken the shading a bit though? And the face DOES look a bit lighter than the rest of the image, but I'm not sure if that's on purpose or not. If not, could you make it the same darkness as the rest of the pelt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:26, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is supose to be paler on the face. If you look, it's on the front paws too. And it's also suppose to be on the chest and bottom of the tail. Re-uploaded! :D. 06:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a lot and make it a little less purplish. 00:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely. I think the earpink colour is fine; however, it could be smaller. Add some shading on the muzzle or add some mottles so that it looks less bare. <span style="">05:47 Sun Oct 30

^Thanks! And there we go...although as for the muzzle, I darkened it up with some shading, and I just think it looks kind of weird now. :3 . 13:24, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mottles. 22:22, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (Ki) - CBA
I really dislike how this one looks compared to the warrior image, but... hopefully you guys can tell me what I did wrong XD Comments? <span style="">23:06 Sun Oct 23

Sedgecreek's a girl xD - 23:15, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink on the shaded side :3 -- 23:23, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make a couple of the stripes a little more... not wavy, but just some not so straight. xD Nice! 23:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded AHDURH how did I miss that?? I think the stripes look fine as they are, but if someone else tells me to change them, I will. <span style="">04:35 Mon Oct 24

Maybe smudge the stripes ever-so-slightly like the other chararts? 20:28, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ugh I really don't like this image... Comments? <span style="">05:02 Tue Oct 25

Don't doubt this one, it's pretty. Can you define the shading on the tail a tad though? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:52, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

This is wayy better than mine. Define the earpink. Beautiful! 23:31, October 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Aw, thanks, guys <3 <span style="">05:43 Fri Oct 28

Can you make the ear pink on the left a bit darker? 00:00, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

If I make it any darker, it'll blend in with the fur. <span style="">05:37 Sun Oct 30

Blur the stripe on the head. The triangular one. 12:15, October 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded <span style="">00:20 Mon Oct 31

CBA? 03:15, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt. Q) ~ For Approval
*shivers in disgust* This is disgusting :S she looks like a chipmunk with a nut in its mouth :| my least fave charart i've ever made. 15:21, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the ones like in my image. 15:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patch on the far side of her face needs to extend all the way to the end. Make the stripes on her face go up and down and define them. You smudged the lineart on top of where her arms are. Add more stripes to her patches. 15:24, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

OK how do I make the stripes match teh other image and where is the smudged lineart. Would you mind showing me I don't see it. Also I'm trying to match them so the only place I see that needs more stripes is teh haunch. And seriously does she not look like a chipmunk with a nut in her mouth? LOL REUPLOADED 15:31, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 15:36, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED hehehe this is so creepy... 15:43, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the haunch more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:56, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the patches and make the stripes match on all of the patches. 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Seperate the patches on her back. Look at her background picture on The Rescue and you can see they are seperated, plus if you have the book she's seen laying down frequently, so you can use that for help as well. The patches on her face wouldn't come down so far. Again, looking at how she looks in the manga should help, if you don't have it look at Harper Collins Browse Inside, it's free and I believe the first page she is on she is shown laying down. 23:07, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I like this MUCH better now. REUPLOADED. She's growing on me :) 11:36, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes still look a little off. If you need help, ask Stoneclaw. She may be able to give you advice on how to make the stripes like hers. 14:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might have smudged/blurred the nose because it looks huge xD 15:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The whole face lineart looks funny. Could you paste a new lineart over it? I could do it if you need help. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:42, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 21:05, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Could you help me Paleh? 11:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patch on the belly/chest area too. 21:32, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded - Kay, fixed all the lineart. :) Had to redo the eyes, but I tried not to touch anything else. If you need help with anything else, fell free to ask. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Try to fix the stripes.. They look irreuglar, since they are a bit too thick. Try to match the ones on Stoneclaws image ^-^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:43, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the back paw and darken the shading a touch. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading specifically on the cream and blur the tail stripes. 20:16, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, add either a highlight or shading on the haunch, and blur the place where brown meets crem on the back left leg. 23:52, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular as well. 10:34, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Adderfang (Alt. W) ~ For approval
I can't remember what the limit for images up for approval is, but... I think it's in its thirties...? If not, dun yell at me, I haven't been here in forever. Dx. Anyhoo, I like this! Here's Adderfang, who was never my fave character, but ah well. Ghost tail  <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FFE600"> BOO! :D  20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

ooh! This is epic. Define the earpink a bit and add some stripes (or whatever they're called) on the front back leg. 21:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ah, earpink. The worst factor of my charats. -__- Someone help with the color. Redder than this, pinker than this, purple-er than this (YES PURPLE-ER IS A WORD)? I hate earpink with a passion. Added stripes to the bare foreleg. Ghost tail  <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FFE600"> BOO! :D  22:03, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Epic! Add an m stripe to the foreheart and define the shading on the back just a tad. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  22:09, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and define the stripes on the tail. 09:02, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! just fix the earpink. <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:39, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

@Cinder You have to be more specific when you said 'Fix the earpink'. Add/define some shading under the chin. 21:32, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added some more back shading, reddened ear pink (I still don't think it looks right..) And added some shading under the chin, which, FYI, I'll never get chin-shading to look that great ever again. xD Ghost  tail  <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FFE600"> BOO! :D  19:55, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! Darken the shading and add more under the haunch. 21:20, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome :) Blur the brown on the chest please. 22:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Can you define the ear pink please? 23:49, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is this an alt for him being called a dark tabby? If so, this should be declined. He's already a brown tabby. Being called "dark" should just be added to his description. <span style="">07:04 Mon Oct 31

Wildheart is right. He was described as a dark tabby, if it is brown than it should be declined. We don't exactly know what kind of dark tabby, could be a dark gray tabby, but there are no details. It also looks more mottled than a tabby, if it stays up fix that. I think this will declined. 23:45, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (Alt. D) ~ For Approval
He was shown as a silver-gray tom with amber eyes in Cats of the Clans, so I went ahead and made his Charart. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:54, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Blur the shading and blur the ear pink as well. 23:58, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink larger, less pink, and define the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred and defined the shading, as well as desaturated, blurred, and enlarged the ear pink. Bluestar11796 01:23, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be triangular, a bit more blurring, and shading needs major blurring. 01:24, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular, and blur where the shading meets with the highlights. (if there are any, if not, just blur the shading more)

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:26, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make him darker, he isn't that light in the book. This is almost the color you'd use for white. 01:35, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened, shading and earpink blurred, and earpink more triangular. Bluestar11796 02:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more pink and make the shadinger bigger, like go farther in. This looks flat. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  02:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded saturated earpink and enlarged shading, and also changed eye color because, to me, it seemed more yellow than amber. Bluestar11796 15:02, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. 16:14, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded earpink blurred. Bluestar11796 16:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pelt less blue-gray and make it more silver-gray. 18:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink more into the ear, make it more triangular, and less neon. Also, blur the highlights. 19:46, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Beautiful just fix the earpink..<font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:40, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took the color from actual silver, fixed earpink, and blurred highlights. Bluestar11796 20:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... Pretty good! Thicken the shading. 02:50, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded thickened shading...I think (Not really sure what that means) Bluestar11796 13:46, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It means make it denser and more noticable. Blur the earpink a bit more. 20:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the shading a bit. It looks a little too light. 22:06, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred earpink, and will brighten shading soon Bluestar11796 22:10, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded eh...I think he looks cool, but I don't think he was depicted this way in the book. Bluestar11796 22:27, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are soo blotchy. Blur it and the hole 9 yards. Also redden the ear pink. 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Don't you dare. They are not soo blotchy. Don't insult this image. This is very pretty, Bluestar. May you define the ear pink and darken the shading? 02:43, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded defined earpink and darkened shading. And, thank you, Icestorm, and Sandstorm, if I get more comments on the shading and higlights being blotchy, I will fix it. Bluestar11796 16:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It does look a little blotchy, but not to the extend Sandstorm makes it out to be. Blend the shading/highlights. Is this your first charart for PCA? 19:30, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well, kinda. I also started Stormkit's charart, but I couldn't continue because of school; Sandstorm took over it. Bluestar11796 20:11, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

There is blurred lineart on the ear, and I think there may be some on the top of the head as well. 20:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There are two white pixels underneath the third spike of fur on the chest. The front leg also has blurred lineart as well as the bottom of the eye. 23:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add scars to his ears. <span style="">00:08 Sun Oct 30

He looks kind of.. Mottled or something. Blur where the shading and highlights (if any) meet.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  14:52, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still very very blothy. 01:14, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, instead of being blunt, provide a way to fix the problem. Like, why not suggest to the artist that they blur it? 01:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is only mostly blotchy on the tail. Blur the tail shading, and maybe go over the rest of the shading with the blur tool too. And also, lighten the earpink a bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:58, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it looks as if the image has flecked so fix that. 23:42, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefang (k) ~ For Approval
It was decided Mousefang would get a kit charart, so I snatched her up. She was like, my what, second tweak? Remember when I gave up on her? Well, look what things ended up to be. Anywho, comments? 01:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 02:11, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripe a little more like the other images. 02:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Like Twilight said, define the earpink, but make it more red. Nice job! 19:44, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. The original earpink was a little orangish, so I just changed the color pallet to red. 21:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a little less visible. Maybe like...10% or something. I know you use layers for this stuff. =P 22:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the chest. 23:40, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't use highlights, so I blurred the shading. 15:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. 19:12, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleface (alt.Q) ~ CBA
First flecked cat; comments? 23:08, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink 23:14, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the tail. 23:41, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and shoulder. 03:04, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the neck shading. 21:57, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The speckles on the lower belly and tail are much too light. Very hard to see. Also add depth to the eye. Looks to plain. 02:39, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The eye looks fine how it is, if you ask me. In fact, I love this image, Misty. Blur the tail shading a tad. 02:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scruff a little bit please. 15:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the ear-pink? If you don't want to, that's okay. I don't really know what I'm saying sometimes :P This looks great! ɛɱ ɱɛy!  20:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Speckles are supposed to be like that, Sandstorm. The speckles on the belly are supposed to be fainter. Define the shading on the paws a tad. 20:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. 21:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the side. 23:36, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 15:53, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. For the first time ever, I'm going to CBA my own charart. xD Since there hasn't been a comment since the 29th, and I fixed the shading, CBA? :3 22:49, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting, but blur the shading. 00:00, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Cody (Q) ~ CBA
I'm really proud of this XD Comments? 21:52, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The collar looks a little painted on. Could you make it more like Mitzi at the least? 23:30, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bigger. 23:34, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. 00:26, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add some shading (or highlights *shrug*) to the tag on the collar? It just looks a bit too plain.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:44, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Think you need to add a stripe going down the back of the tail like on the back. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 01:29, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is the nose colored in? 01:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

You can reference Nutmeg or Quince for how collars look on kittypet queens. 02:02, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The lineart for the collar is off Quince's image, but I defined the shading on it. Also, I'm not sure what to do about the nose as the colour is off her kittypet image, but I don't know if it's meant to look like that or if the artist forgot. 09:32, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripe on the hindleg. 11:37, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the front legs. 12:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded 13:28, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink just a little bit. Well done, Speckle! 19:19, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:26, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but the collar just looks off. Maybe thin out the lineart a tad? <span style="">00:49 Mon Oct 31

Re-uploaded 16:20, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Just her collar circle thing is cut off some. <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 18:25, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:53, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you darken the shading a bit? 21:31, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:46, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Fantastic! CBA? 21:54, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt W2) - CBA
Tried a new stripe style with this one. Not sure about what I was supposed to name the file - just let me know if I need to change it. Comments? 02:51, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit, I can't really see it.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  03:40, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

File name's correct. Blur the shading more. 03:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love the stripes. Define the hanch and face shading. If the face doesn't have it, add it in, cause it looks a little bit flat. 05:23, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty :3 Darken the shading. <span style="">05:53 Sun Oct 30

Re-uploaded. 19:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the ear-pink. 19:28, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you take off a few brown pixels on the front left paw where the brown meets the white? Maybe it's just me, but I think the paw should look mostly white. 19:31, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not really sure what you mean, Squirrel... I think the paw looks pretty white to me. 21:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think I get what she's talking about. On the paw she referenced, it looks like there's less white, when compared to the others. 23:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still so confused... left paw looks exactly the same shade of white as every other one. 23:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, no. Not the shade of white used, but the amount of white on the paw. It doesn't seem like there's the same amount. 23:44, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Like... say he was wearing socks. His left sock isn't the same length as the other ones? Because white paws don't have to be the same. 23:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Good reference. Yes, that's what I'm referring to. And they don't? Never knew that. You learn something new every day. xD 23:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, check out this. 23:58, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

You need to darken the shading and the face white looks to..odd. IDk it just looks odd to me. 01:17, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, the shading and face are fine. 01:18, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the paws. This is so pretty <3 <span style="">01:20 Mon Oct 31

Re-uploaded. Aw, thanks :) 01:28, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? This looks lovely. <span style="">07:07 Mon Oct 31

Sorry, but can you define the light/highlight on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:30, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Millie (Alt Lo) ~ CBA
All colors came straight from Ivystripe, so don't tell me to change anything. 18:41, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 19:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:14, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste behind the collar and at the very bottom of the image under the front paws. Also, can you smear the front left leg's stripe some more on the bottom? 19:25, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:30, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add some shading to the collar? Just to give it more depth, or something.. xD

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  21:26, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's a wide gap between stripes. Add another one there. 21:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

The collar has shading, and no, Icey. Look at the kittypet image. There's four stripes. 21:38, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Fail on my part.. xD Blur the tail stripes a bit more.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:21, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No worries. Re-uploaded. 00:32, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks lovely. Comments before approval? <span style="">00:53 Mon Oct 31

Sorry to interrupter, but I can't see the head stripe. Could you add/make it more visible? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:03, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Damn layers.... It got mixed in with the others. Re-uploaded. 03:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Restarting CBA. Excellent job, by the way :) 03:14, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt. L) - For approval
Ok, I am really proud of this one...he looks so handsome =3 It was agreed he'd get an alt. for his cream underparts depiction on CotC, as well as it being shown again on the cover of Crookedstar's Promise (though if he was just brown in CotC he probably wouldn't have got an alt). I did this over my file I did with his crooked jaw tweak since I had the layers, and bits and pieces of his markings play homage to Bramble's version as it was the first picture on the site I instantly adored. Brown colors and earpink come off his current picture. Comments for improvement? 02:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

There is a white pixel on his tail, and some waste near his haunch. Awesome job! Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  02:44, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

The white pixel is supposed to be part of the lineart, but I think you should fill it in with black; it just looks out of place. Blur the cream on his elbow. I adore this. <span style="">02:48 Mon Oct 31

Just so you know, the white pixil is actually a gap in where the fuzz in the fur is, you can see through it. We had this discussion when Bluestar's alt leader was up as well. I can fill it in black but not pelt color because there's no pelt there, if that makes any sense. Grr edit conflicts D: 02:50, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! I'd say blue the cream parts in on the edges, but that's just me. 02:52, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Aaaand reuploaded before Shellheart's comment, one moment please and I'll reupload again. Done. And thankya ma'ams :3 02:53, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a leeetle bit. I really want to CBA this, but I figure I should let everybody else have a chance to comment first XD <span style="">02:57 Mon Oct 31

Blur the shading where the front legs meet the rest of the body... Just to let you know, there are no words that describe how epic and full of win this image is. 02:58, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded =)  03:02, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think...... this is my new favorite image. Could you darken the ears a bit though? I'm not sure if they're meant to be cream or not, but since it's only one pixel wide, it makes it looks like it wasn't colored it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I know you took the eye color from the normal image, but can you make it more green? IMO the eyes on the normal leader need to be changed too, that color's more yellow tinted green than pale green. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Eye color look better? And yes they were meant to be since they appeared that way in his images. I can make them all brown but I just went ahead and made them all cream (the backs would be brown)  03:20, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

And maybe add a line connecting his nose to his mouth? I wanna steal this. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 03:38, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where you smudged on the leg stripes. This is great! Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  13:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded If you steal this I'm filing a complaint xD  16:07, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Omg this is amazing Ivy!=) Just make the whiskers on the left as long as the ones on the right. <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 18:28, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

The whiskers are part of the lineart. In fact... I can see nothing wrong with this image, except for the fact it hasn't been CBA'd yet. Sooooo.... CBA? 18:33, October 31, 2011 (UTC) oh hahaha i knew that...........by the way i'm not interupting CBA....<font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 21:04, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'm so sorry for interupting CBA, but the cream needs to be blurred. I promise when that's done, I'll CBA this. This is BEAUTIFUL. 21:06, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Especially try for the face cream parts, like around the eye. But Icey is right, this is beautiful. 23:28, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's a couple stray pixels by his whiskers on the right side and by his one dark paw. This is gorgeous, great job! -- ɛɱ ɱɛy!  23:38, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink just a tad. This is beautiful! - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:28, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. D) ~ For Approval
Since Runningnose didn't work, I'll try her. :3 She was described as pale gray somewhere, comments? Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  04:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and blur it. This is lovely :3 <span style="">04:10 Mon Oct 31

Reuploaded Got rid of the waste around it, brightened and blurred the earpink. Thank you! ^-^  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  04:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Make the earpink more triangular. 10:31, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Made the earpink more triangular. :3  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  11:55, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 22:25, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined/kind of brightened the earpink. Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:11, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and center the ear-pink, thicken the shading on the haunch and define the face highlight (if there is one xP) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:26, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (alt.K) ~ For approval
Comments? . 20:52, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, 21:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripe a little? I can barley see them, not a whole lot just a little. 21:15, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Bur the earpink a little bit. 21:19, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we decided quite a few times that he wasn't gonna get an alt for being called ginger? Unless this is an alt for something that I missed/isn't on his page? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:53, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think this is for being ginger, but I don't think it should be declined, since ginger is different from golden brown. Ginger is Firestar-color, and golden brown is...Thornclaw-color. They're completely different. Since cats get alts for simply having minor changes like white paws, then there's no reason to decline this. 21:57, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:26, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt.W3) - For Approval
Meh... Brightheart just doesn't strike me as a white she-cat... -.- Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:24, November 1, 2011 (UTC)