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Mudfur (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. -- 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad? ​​​​​​

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry 01:34, 8/30/2019

Still working? 14:39, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They lost their drawing pen. I believe it is Vec who gave them an extension Moo (talk) 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, sorry for the long wait, like Moo said I lost my pen and Vec (may have been Jayce I can't remember) gave me an extension. I didn't want to put it off any longer so I did it with a keyboard. Anyway, I did all the suggestions (or most) that you guys said, what do you think?

Looking good Firespring! Hmm, curve the shading on the haunch more (let me know if you need a redline) and there's waste outside the tail. The coloring on the nosepink and mottles are still a little off (nose should be #1b1411, the mottles should be #493522). -- 23:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now?

You're getting there! I think the shading could be smoothed a bit, and the mottles look sharper on the alt star (try running a low opacity sharpen tool or a low sharpen filter on the mottles, beware of color pixels). You could also use a low opacity pencil and draw over the mottles, which will make them sharper as well. -- 00:12, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the <-- ear. 00:23, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? Also, there already is shading on the ear. 00:28, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Is it me, or am I seeing texture on the image? If it's texture, it needs to be removed as the alt star doesn't have any. -- 00:31, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Removed texture. 00:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading on --> that ear but not on <-- this ear. 01:04, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added shading to left ear. 05:34, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a some more on the body

Reuploaded. 21:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to the back leg and smooth it out on the shoulder and haunch more. -- 21:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:30, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading on the < ear; helps with flatness

Sasha (W) - For Approval
i hate this. it's horrible as heck. 05:42, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you remove the shading over the eyes, Smudge the tail a bit more smoothly, and lighten the shading? Thanks! Moo (talk) 08:35, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it, too. -- 15:08, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:40, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the shading depth on the front legs, and smooth the shading more. -- 17:46, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:57, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading, and erase it on the eye. -- 18:59, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

And can you smudge the earpink and brown a bit more? Moo (talk) 21:20, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. gimme a sec, and the eye shading will be gone. 06:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

'''look at them eyes. reuploaded. 06:27, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading more --Moo (talk) 04:23, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:31, September 3, 2019 (UTC)'''

The base colour looks too "cool" compared to her other images; maybe try #C59A70 for the base? Or even giving the shading a red tint, though that is completely artist's choice

'''reuploaded. tell me if should change the shading tint. 00:14, September 4, 2019 (UTC)'''

The brown and earpink appear too dark compared with her other images. 14:41, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the haunch shading a touch; just so it curves a little more to the shape of the haunch since rn it just covers most of it

'''reuploaded. 00:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Try #5F4331 for the brown ears and tail

'''reuploaded. 01:54, September 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

It might be wikia just being a butt; but i'm not really seeing any changes? The brown still looks too dark

'''reuploaded. better? 16:02, September 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

still not really seeing a difference between the uploads

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. I love my child​ 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. -- 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^

reuploaded I love my child​ 16:48, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a tiny bit on the tail, plus I think it could be smoothed some. -- 23:07, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the chest? It looks rather flat there 17:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ 15:17, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

I feel as if this doesn't quite match the pattern placement of the queen's tail, which is what it should most reflect since both are on the same definite side; vs, the star is angled and thus not the best to match this blank to

Softpelt (K) - For Approval
Here I think the shading needs smoothing but I wanna get this in quickly so I remember Moo (talk) 05:47, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 06:10, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit too, while you're at it. ​​​​​

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:25, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading more, I'd use a #737373 color tint. 04:46, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

If you need the files from the other images, feel free to let me know, I've got the app and warrior. It is a solid though, so you could do well without it either way

Ok thank you Spooky Moo (talk) 23:52, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 00:10, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. -- 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 00:15, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

a wee bit more? 00:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded No more. I think it might even be too dark right now Moo (talk) 04:04, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to differ, but I do feel it does need to be darkened still, because it lacks depth; checked on two screens. The file revisions here don't show it darkening very much between uploads, and it definitely isn't too dark.

Thats weird it's super dark for me. but i can? Moo (talk) 23:30, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Spooky that you should darken it and define the shading depth a bit more. -- 23:31, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:52, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

lessen some of the shading from the face just a tiny bit as it looks too dark compared to the rest of the body

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 22:37, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the facial shading could be receded still, just so it follows the curvature of the face

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 05:06, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the haunch I love my child​

Snowbird (W) ~ For Approval
I tried a new light source so go on easy on me lol

17:40, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Some shading leaking along the chest and add some more shading to the > forleg. 18:21, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

19:14, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Make the nose pink to match the rogue and smoothen out the shading on the back leg. 19:54, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

20:51, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

expand the haunch shading. 00:57, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and it's also leaking in several places on the tail. -- 01:00, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

01:58, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a little bit? 15:06, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

16:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Still seeing some leaking shading along the ---> chest and head, and smooth the shading some more on the haunch and tail. 00:22, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded shading this has caused me more excruciating pain then i have ever experienced during my time here

02:05, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

sometimes it's pain too Define the shading on the front legs and tail. -- 02:07, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

02:59, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste floating around the image (most spots where shading is next to)

can you maybe show me? I'm not seeing any of it on the file.

23:33, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I'm not sure where any of the waste is, but I erased around where the shading is. If I missed any/missed completely and I'm oblivious, let me know. 17:00, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

All of the highlighted blue pixels are waste

Squirrelflight (Ghost) - CBA
i tried. modeled most of her pattern off her deputy image 18:29, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

wait, what about Jose's blank? 00:43, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight didn't stay in an unknown residence because she didn't die, so she'd get the ghost blank. -- 00:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be a neck stripe that doesn't reach all the way (see app, queen, and leader for what i mean). 15:06, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded also added a couple more stripes to the tail 04:11, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think she would also need her torn ear? 00:22, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded also forgot to fill in the nose i'm really killing it lately   02:10, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Snow (Sister) (Ro) ~ For Approval
I really can't shade white cats lol

00:44, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading, smooth it out, and there's some waste under the tail, belly, and chest. -- 00:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to her face and ears. 00:59, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

16:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Waste along the tail, underneath the stomach, and above the head I believe. And maybe ad a little bit of shading on the haunch curve near the bottom; seems to jut out imo. 00:03, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

00:45, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light to <--- ear? 00:23, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

00:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

The shading seems just a touch blotchy on the lower face/upper chest, could you take a pass and smooth those? I also think it's leaking away from the face on the chin, and there's waste floating around in most spots where shading is

Squirrel (cat) (Ki) - For Evaluation
Okay since sombody is working on Moon I rebranded by Charart as Squirrel since they're also gray.Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit, since it looks too magenta and not a natural gray color. The shading needs to be defined a bit as well. And remember, don't thumb your images! Just go into source and remove the |thumb from the file name. There is a lot of waste around the character so make sure to remove that, and make sure "For Evaluation" is in the title. Sorry if this is lot to you -- 22:20, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh crud! Ur right I 4got 2 put "For Evaluation"Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh and  I removed the thumbnailBluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

This should also be uploaded as File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png. -- 22:30, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bte I tired remeoving the wast with the eraser but It won't go away! It's not ven visable when I edit the Charart on Paint.netBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I'll keep tryingBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! My bad The wast is visable on Paint.net it's just hard 4 me 2 c!Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:36, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I wouldn't use Paint, I would use GIMP or FireAlpaca to make images instead since they're way better in quality and can make the image look better (both are free). -- 22:37, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I c there's still waste! Dang It! I'll fix that imediately!

Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:32, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a lot more and expand it. The shading is far too overblurred, probably as a result of Gaussian Blur (which is not recommended as it causes shading to leak), so it could be sharpened some, retrace it with a 4px paintbrush or pencil and smudge it with a 6-10px brush at 40% strength. The lineart is also overblurred, to fix just erase on your shading layers, and the blurriness will be gone. -- 23:34, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 11:43, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Please continue to reupload over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png 23:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo the Charart since I merged the layers on Paint.net before I began to edit the Charart on Gimp Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:32, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

What kind of shading should I use to shade my Charart? Bluedragon64 (talk) 13:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Most people use blurred, smudged, or drawn-on shading. A small other note - please change the earpink to something a little less purple/neony.

Reupoladed! Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:44, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Remember, don't thumb your images. Just go into source editor and remove the |left. Another way to avoid this is to upload from Squirrel (cat).kit.png instead of going back and doing the posting process again. Also, you have a extra .png in the file name so remove that.

As for the image, the earpink is still neon, darken it or desaturate it some. It also needs expanding quite a bit. Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The shading needs to be expanded everywhere except the chest, and smoothed out a lot. Also, add a thinner, darker layer of shading so the image has some depth. -- 12:53, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

How do define your light source? Bluedragon64 (talk) 14:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

If you need help with a light source I'd recommend checking the apprentice tutorials, since they were recently updated with new sources =) -- 14:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'm consulting a Gimp apprentence totorial for shading. But I don't know what it means when the tortorial tells me to draw the bits with penicl  "where the image is in shadow". Can u plz explain what that means? Bluedragon64 (talk) 20:58, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

A light source is where the light and shading are supposed to be on an image. Say if the light source was ^, the shading would be on the back, and if down it would be on the flank more. Does this help? -- 21:00, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smokehaze (Ki) - For Approval
05:33, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading out

There's waste near the ear furthest from us. Also, could you remove the shading above the nose, and add some to the chest? 16:36, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened. But I'm confused where us the light source? Moo (talk) 22:56, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is something similar to this. With this source there would be a tiny bit of light on < this back leg, near the toe line. -- 02:06, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ah right. Lighten the shading? Moo (talk) 05:11, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, Vec, could you give me an extension with this and Sasha? My tablet’s lost. -- 04:35, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Drizzle (Ki) - For Approval
Thanks for saving me some of my images btw lol 13:41, 9/07/2019

I'm not sure if it's the shading style or not, but this doesn't seem to match the old version of the file? It's probably the shading, but this looks more smudged than what you had before. Also, you were inactive, so the images were fair game. We did vote on it. ​​​​​​​​

Given these are much larger blanks than the old ones, on the old kit my intention was basically the same idea as this. Also yes, most of it is the shading, but if the need be, I will blur the ends of the patches slightly. Also I'm aware this was voted on; I meant it with no ill will :P 16:55, 9/07/2019

It wouldn't hurt to smudge the patches a little softer out; if only so the rest of the images don't need to be altered to match how this is now

I suppose if this is how it was done on the old kit the OA would know better.

Furze (Q) - For Approval
oh look a pointed tabby -- 18:49, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shading's a tad too sharp on the < back leg

Reuploaded -- 23:12, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Unknown) - For Approval
Very strange working on a blank I created lol. Im super happy it got approved, thanks ya'll. Im kinda out of practice for regular blanks so bear with me, it looks like a mess and Ill definitely try to fix the horrid shading. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:07, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

can you add/define the shading to the tail tip? 13:02, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Snowtuft (W) - For Approval
01:44, September 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

could you possibly brighten up the eyes a little? This looks great! 17:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Silverstream (Alt warrior 2) - For Approval
here. I'm happy to finally be a PCA Warrior! Moo (talk) 01:50, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome job Millie! Define the shading depth a bit and smooth the shading out. -- 01:53, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

O.o I completely missed the earpink and nose! Also thanks Green! I'm working on all that now Moo (talk) 02:03, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:10, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading depth (adding a secondary layer of shading to a smaller area should do the trick!)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 07:25, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Spireclaw (A) - CBA
My first apprentice! Tried to match the shading style of the set 17:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Pebbleshine (Ki) - CBA
Why??? Was this so much harder to do the second time??? 18:32, 9/08/2019

CBA?

Juniperclaw (W) ~ For Approval


00:48, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Dewspring (W) - For Approval
Can you guess my opinion on him? -- 01:10, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

best cat 2k19? lol anyway, i think with the light source coming from top left, the forelegs should be in shadow especially while theyre being blocked out by the hind leg 20:18, 9/09/2019

The legs would be in light, I based this source off several images with the same thing. -- 21:36, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

The texture needs to match the direction of fur on the front leg (it needs to go down instead of sideways) 15:14, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Socks (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 00:23, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sootfur (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 00:23, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Pad (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 00:23, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste outside the muzzle. -- 00:45, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:05, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (K) ~ Approved
Love this guy for no reason. 02:22, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Mosspaw (ShC) (K) ~ Approved
Smudged shading to match the app...that I did in 2017 rip. 02:22, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Hollowspring (A) ~ For Approval
I cannot see anything on this image because it's so dark. 03:23, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Silverstream (K) - For Approval
the stripes are whack and im probably gonna fix 'em tomorrow because i matched to the starclanner and old kit?

Snaketooth (RC) (W) - For Approval
cool name bro

Squirrelfur (W) ~ For Approval
When you stay out in the sun for too long -- 17:03, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

Spiderfoot (W) ~ For Approval
-- 17:26, September 10, 2019 (UTC)