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Bluestar (Alt. Ki2)- For Approval


In the allegiances for Bluestar's Prophecy, she was described as a gray she-cat with blue eyes, and, in case you couldn't tell by my username, she's my favorite character, so I snatched her up as soon as I found out she would get one for that. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad. Brighten the ear-pink and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the left ear's earpink. 00:14 Fri Dec 2

Cute! Define the shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:53, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 02:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the --> (right) side of her. 23:54, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the shading on the paws. 19:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks as if it's not in the right place on ---> this side. 21:21 Sat Dec 3

And center this ---> ear pink. And blur <--- this sides earpink a bit. 22:50 Sat Dec 3

This looks the color of her pale alt, which is still kinda blue-gray, maybe color pick from her gray leader alt? It'd look more gray probably. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 21:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen and center the ear pink. Darken and blur the shading, it looks like you have none. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is gray and define the shading. 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the gray lineart, defined the shading, and got rid of some waste i found; changes not showing. Bluestar11796 17:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found some more waste, and changes are still not showing. Bluestar11796 17:53, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading on the <-- 21:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the right ear pink. 21:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is off, I belive. If not, lighten the shading on <--- that side and blur it so it looks a little bit better. 23:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

As said above and blur the shading too 23:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color different from the pelt color, as it looks the same. 05:34, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

As said already BLUR THE SHADING TOOOOONS! Also the shading placement is off it should be on the neck and on the legs too. 14:36, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looks blotchy, but I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 16:11, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are white streaks on her face and chest. Make those gray. 16:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a bit, and blur the highlights (if any) and shading to make them blend more together. 22:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC). The whole pelt color looks blotchy and uneven, smooth it out 23:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 00:07, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can. Smooth it out. 01:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's possible to blur it. If you're using pixlr, change to something else. I know pixlr only allows you to blur so much. 03:23, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

I do use pixlr at school, but I can't use gimp right now 'cause I'm at school right now, and I can't download anything on the school computers. Bluestar11796 17:52, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Gaussian blur on pixlr. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:51, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpinks. 21:49 Thu Dec 8

Are you still working on this? 20:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 01:08, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It hasn't been seven days yet. 01:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. And sorry for the delay; my computers at home are crashing, so I haven't been able to get on, but I remembered that my school has photoshop, so, yeah. Bluestar11796 17:43, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the shading placement, then blur a LOT. Do you use layers? Brightstripes 16:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I just started using layers, but it's kinda hard with photoshop, because you can't change the background, and that's all I can use right now. I'll try, though. Bluestar11796 18:56, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading darker and you're good to go. 00:18, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think the changes are showing. Bluestar11796 14:32, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's a ton of blurred lineart on both sides. 00:19, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading a ton, define the earpink, and make the eyes less neon.

Reuploaded I basicly redid the whole image, cause I don't know how to fix blurred lineart, and who did the comment above mine? You forgot to sign. And I'll leave the eye color the way it is because she has peircing, ice-blue eyes unless more people agree with you. Changes not showing. Bluestar11796 16:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. 21:27, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the color match her leader image, right now it looks to dark/gray. 22:21, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Perhaps make the ear pink pointed a bit more. -- 07:06, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. 18:29 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Believe it or not, the colors were taken from her leader alternate. Bluestar11796 19:32, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and darken the shading. 20:01 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:29, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth in the shading, it looked a bit flat. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 22:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour and darken the shading. 01:08 Tue Dec 20

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Bluestar11796 01:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Please note that if this is not complete in ten days, it will be declined. You need to smooth out the shading a lot and blur the ear pink. 19:05, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur out the highlights blur the shading and blur the earpink... 23:43, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Seedkit (Ki) - For Approval
Oi...I must really like kits. :P Comments~? 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Redden the ear-pink and define it in her ginger ear. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:23, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks. 19:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Beautiful Twi! Blur the places where the patches are smudged, they're too sharp. 19:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, I see waste. I'll kill it~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Killed the evil waste~! >:) 19:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! *noms* Define the shading. :3 (probably more evil waste for you to kill) 19:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate the evil waste. :P 22:09, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink the slightest bit. Make the ear pink on ---> that side a little bit smaller to make the other one. 23:14, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine to me. 01:43, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

What to change and what not to change? 02:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to change the earpink, it's fine, however could you define the shading a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - But of course. :3 21:44, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawn to reserve another charart 00:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

If this is withdrawn may I do it? 00:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may. Go reserve it 00:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the confusion, I thought we were doing apprentice images. Is it okay if I still work on it, or no? 00:40, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so back to for approval. I will bw working on this so it might take a day or two because I am going to be doing it on GIMP. Thanx for your patience. 21:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. I just can't work with this...Gimp shows the lineart blurred and all and I couldn't work with this. I'm sorry. 15:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Since this is withdrawn (again), may I do it? Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  15:47, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to ask, just go for it ;3 18:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading was to light in my opinion, so I darkened it and I found more evil waste to kill! Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  19:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! SO pretty, Make the earpinks the same size. 19:48 Sun Dec 11

Reuploded Purplemoon   We wish you a Perry Christmas...  19:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'd lighten the whole image because it looks too dark. Also, blur the neck shading as it looks to hard edge. 20:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon  Three Advent candles lighted  20:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image a bit more. 06:58 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded Purplemoon  Three Advent candles lighted  12:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Crop the image to get rid of the extra space and lighten the white. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It was hard to lighten the white... Purplemoon Three Advent candles lighted  21:56, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

The white still needs to be whiter. 00:16, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 01:19, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a week without an upload that I know of. <span style="">05:42, Mon, Dec, 19, 2011

Yes, but I think the white looks fine. I am still working on this. I've been so busy with school and stuff... Purplemoon  <font color="FF6699">Four candles 6 days!  14:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

The white still needs to be lightened, and the shading blurred. <span style="">01:10 Tue Dec 20

Define the right earpink. 23:45, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Horrible. Comments? 02:00, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading, define the haunch highlight and the one on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and brighten it. 02:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I just noticed I uploaded on meh B-Day ^^ 02:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Either darken the head shading or lighten the "highlights". <span style="">02:27 Thu Dec 8

This doesn't look very tawny... Maybe take the color from Birchfall's alt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the color from the ear pink chart, I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else has an opinion. 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. Also, Take the colors from Oakheart's alt warrior, if you're looking for tawny. This doesn't look...tawny...if you ask me. If it is, it's pale and should be darkened. 03:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did Okay I darkened it because it is tawny I took it from the ear pink chart. I would have used gausion blur, but I don't really know how to use it :P 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better, actually. Now, define the ear pink. I don't care if it's from the chart or not. I can't see it. 03:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading quite a bit. Also, just cause the color (pelt OR earpink) is from the chart, doesn't always make it right. Sometimes the colors just need to be tweaked to fit certain images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading (sorry I don't mean to repeat things) and make the earpink darker. 16:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna be the death of me 18:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more. 13:10, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it worse. 02:27, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be darkened more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more umm pink and not peach. xD This looks great! 00:19, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @ Cinder I don't know waht you mean so I just darkened the ear pink. Changes not showing. 21:43, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading; it's a bit flat. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I meant that you should make the earpink pink-ish because right now it looks peach.. 21:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink looks horrible. 00:47, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more and darken the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading also. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *hides* Don't kill me for making it worse! 14:42, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I like it.... not sure if it's my place to say that though Tigerheart273 14:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Course its your place to say that. I love this picture. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 16:41, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, yeah, you can say that it looks nice, but only after 24 hours of no comments, and if nobody has already commented to say the same. Otherwise, it just clutters up the talk page. The shading needs to be blurred and darkened a lot. <span style="">20:04 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded I used layers now. Tell me if it's too dark. Thank you for your positive comments, you guys :) 20:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yay layers! It looks so much better. Lighten the layer opacity a tad and erase the shading on the top of the muzzle and add some to the ears. Also make the earpink more visible, as I cannot see it at all right now. <span style="">20:53 Sat Dec 17

Looks like you're getting along well with layers. ;) Also add some shading to the foreleg farthest from us. 21:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I would reupload but when I do the opacity, it just...does what it's not supposed to do >_< I can't explain it. 21:33, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and define the earpink (if there is earpink). 00:09, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay the opacity is not working for me so....bleh. 00:58, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I'm sorry guys but I'm gonna have to withdraw this. With Christmas time aournd, I just don't have time at the current moment. I might be able to work on something else, but not right now. Sorry 01:35, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. 02:05, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:57, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

He's perfect, and frankly he's been up for far too long. CBA? Note to leads that this image will be approved after 24 hours, not 12. 23:27, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this image is lovely, but it looks more brown than tawny. Try taking the color from either Birchfall or Oakheart's alts. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes on file history, dumb me forgot to erase the waste before hand. 04:08, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. Continuing CBA. 20:14, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Everything about this is lovely, except the intensity of the shading. I can barely see it well enough to tell that it's shading. Darken it a tad, please, and then I'll continue the 12 hours. <span style="">01:12 Tue Dec 20

O.O What in the world happened to Redwillow....??? Um, is there a reason there's waste scribbled everywhere outside the lineart? Is it my computer glitching weirdly, or is that a test or...what? o.o 03:38, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think your computer's glitching, 'cause I don't see anything :P <span style="">03:45 Tue Dec 20

This is really good! Layers help. :P Is this brown? If you can, can you make it a tad more tawny. -- 20:42, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (A) - For Approval


Okay, so, she's in 'Chararts needing images' Under Thunderclan. For a Apprentice...wwhy, i don't know, i think it should've been in Shadowclan but okayyy. Anyway here she is! I didnt know if i shouldv'e torn her ears and give her scars or not, so i didn't and i took ALL chararts from her mc image. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The Warriors App said her apprentice name was Yellowpaw. =P Blur the shading. 03:01, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Could you make the fur spikes more consitant with the other images please? 03:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the snout needs to be shortened. 03:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the part not in shadow on her tail longer and run the length of her tail. Smudge the pelt color into the ear. Give her a light part on the dip in her back as the light would hit her there. 03:07, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and she needs a dark gray/black nose 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. <span style="">03:42 Fri Dec 9

Blur the highlights. (If you used them) -- 13:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ruffles in the fur a bit larger and sharper like her other chararts, also make the muzzle a bit shorter. - Scarletwind    ✧ L i s a n n a<span style="color: #592e81">✧          23:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the ear-pink more please. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

Okay, give me a few, i have to get my S.S. HW done, how do i make her ruffles sharper? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:46, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and smudge the earpink into the ear. Curve the line of the jaw more. <span style="">22:44 Sat Dec 10

Blend the highlight/shading on the tail into the pelt. 18:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:49, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you feel comfortable with it, I think the image would benefit from teh eyes being rounded slightly. 03:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

How would I do that? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:29, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 15:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading/highlights are blotchy. Can you blur them? Also tone down the highlights (or darken the base coat if you're not using them) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  16:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened her base coat(Didn;t want to use Highlights on tis one....) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:26, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's a white pixel in the ruffled fur on her shoulder. 22:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I have like NO idea how that got there....O.o Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to contradict myself, but lighten the whole thing to match the MC image. Also, the shading doesn't make sense, look at the apprentice tutorial for how it's supposed to look. Blur it a ton and blur the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * laughs* *roll eyes* Make up your mind, why don't you? Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 01:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-That had better been worth the headache. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Headache.....So, oh teh chat, Paleclaw told me to lighten her a touch, and to blur her shading. So i did....Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. 20:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be all one colour. 20:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the pelt into the earpink. 20:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I just redid the shading altogether, and the fur ruffles...'cause i didn't like the way they looked, and fixed her ear-pink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:56, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose darker and define the shading  01:48, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. However, it doesn't really make a whole lot of sense unless the sun was underneath her. Maybe look at the tutorial for shading placement? 23:28, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I know I am only an apprentice, but it I think shading needs to be added to the belly because on the shading placement for an apprentice it is there, but I do not see any there. Spotted ♥  leaf  Do, Re, Mi! 16:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows that? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:14, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Darken it, blur it, and try looking at the apprentice tutorials for placement. <span style="">01:13 Tue Dec 20

I did Highlights(Or in this case, main pelt color.) coming from the back....i'll change it if soeone else agrees.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:41, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shding alot. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  02:43, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading also. -- 20:43, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I GOT VOLECLAW :D I copied all of the shading and colors from his warrior so dont be slapping me 4 that :P 13:45, December 8, 2011 (UTC) (im going to eventually set up my sig on here :P )

Blur the shading a lot and try to make it look like it's coming from one light source. Nice job, though. ^^ 14:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge where the earpink meets the gray, and the two paws farthest from us should be darker to match with the shading. 14:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLAODED, changes aren't showing :| 14:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement more like the one in the tutorial. The shading doesn't make sense right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye and smudge the pelt color into the earpink so he looks floofeh =3 18:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

And add a white pixel to the eye if it's not already there. *can't see it* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

He seems darker than his other images, or is it just my bad eyes? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 00:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading on the tail or darken the shading on the belly and legs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. I can see the layers in which they get stronger. 20:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Bluefeathers friend here, she said she'd reupload it tomorrow. 14:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think I will re-do this tomorrow as I cannot stand how this is. And I can't really fix the shading placement because for some reason, on Pixlr, every time I use gaussian blur on it, it changes the placement :\ 00:39, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you need any help, if the shading isn't going right, I could help you. <span style="">01:47 Tue Dec 13

REUPLOADED Mrrrrrrrrrooooooowwwwwwwww :P 12:23, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

THIS IS BOOTIFUL BLUEFEATHER! No comments from me :) Grayflower10 16:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Don't leave a comment just for complimenting the image unless there haven't been any comments for a couple days, please, Grayflower. Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the ears a bunch. The shading still doesn't make a lot of sense. You also need to fix your signature, Bluefeather. <span style="">19:53 Tue Dec 13

Ok, first of all, i've been having SO MUCH TROUBLE WITH SMUDGING. This entire time it's been for approval i've been trying to smudge it in but it just won't. I did the shading exactly like the apprentice tutorial....and I honestly don't think that the shading needs blurred. Not trying to say that I won't blur it but I just don't see why it needs blurred. And Sweetflower is making me a sig so it'll be fixed soon :) 20:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay well I can't see any lack of shading on the shoulder ("highlights", if you will) and it doesn't make much sense. It'll look a lot better if you add some "highlight" (just erase the shading) on the shoulder and then blur it manually if you use Gaussian blur. <span style="">01:29 Wed Dec 14

Are you still working on this, Bluefeather? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, yes I am. I just used dodge on it if that's alright.. 18:42, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it a ton, if you look at this charart and the warrior image close to each other, the warrior is much lighter. Hmmm..lighten the shading? 20:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink into the pelt to make it look natural. 21:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear-pink into the pelt. <span style="">16:06 Sun Dec 18

How do you smudge ear-pink into a pelt because i've tried numerous times and it always ends up going out. :\ 15:45, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, did I break him? 16:40, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and smudge it into the ear some more. Blur the shading and darken it slightly. <span style="">01:14 Tue Dec 20

She asked me to reupload this 4 her FerretclawLover 21:38, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the elbow so it looks like it's sticking out like the pose suggests. Breeze whisker  00:24, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
I am very proud of this <3. :3. Comments? Elorisa  01:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

You should be. :) There is waste around the charart, and blur the tail shading. 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Would this get a charart? All we know is that he's a "dark tom", and we can't just copy the grayscale from a comic... 04:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteclaw got one and he was also mentioned as a dark tom. I think he should. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Just...dust and echoes 07:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He does appear to be almost black in the image he is shown in; I'll tweak him a tad, but I think he should get one :3. Elorisa  13:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I concede that. Go nuts. 14:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

I can see waste between the whiskers and possibly under the chin area. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 07:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. 19:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ -- Elorisa   21:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">22:40 Sat Dec 10

Blur the highlight(?) on the back leg. <span style="">11:55 Tue Dec 13

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, it just loks blurred. <span style="">00:02 Thu Dec 15

Are you still working on this, Risa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you are, the tiny glimmer in the --> eye is too...wide. Long. I don't know, too --->this way. 20:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it, gimp is down and I lost my layers >.> I'll upload it in the next few days. -- Elorisa   23:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading into the pelt a bit more. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:07, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 00:10, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

What is "the next few days"? If you're not going to upload this for ten days at a time, I'd recommend you withdraw it, as it's just taking up space. <span style="">01:16 Tue Dec 20

Firestar(A) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Not my best. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think he should be short haired. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make him match the leader image. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur his markings more and define the shading. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 02:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I made him short-haired and I'll do everything else in the morning. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. RE-UPLOADED. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match the leader better. <span style="">00:55 Sat Dec 10

And blur where the belly meets the ginger. 02:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna withdraw this. I'm not quite ready for Firestar yet. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I'll reuploaded this ASAP. 17:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Sandstorm. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  17:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay I re-did the stripes the best I could and I also tweaked a few other things. 17:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the stripes, belly, and earpink, and make the stripes match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded okay I color picked off of his leader image and I did my very best with the stripes. 18:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the belly to the pelt. 18:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded I smudged it a touch too. Changes not showing. 18:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

You probably took the colors from the shaded part of the image, cause the stripes are still too dark. Lighten them. And they don't really match the leader image still.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the non-shaded part of the image. Okay, I looked at the Firestar leader image and I mached it to the best of my ability okay? It matches it the way I see it. 18:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the stripes sharper at the ends. 19:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pale belly come to a point instead of being round at the top  19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry, but it doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">23:06 Sat Dec 10

Add shading and highlights. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, she just has to add shading. She can add highlights if she wants to, but it's not necessary. 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sorry.

Reuploaded Okay Ivystripe gave me a redline. Better? 18:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, Firestar ;3 And yes, Better Sandstorm. Define the shading even more and blur together the markings. 18:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Give all of the credit to Ivystripe. 19:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading more and the stripes still need to be lightened a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stripes fail :P 01:29, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to make it look like the other images and blur the shading so that it blends more into the unshaded parts. 01:34, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Those are the right amount of stripes. I should know since I did all but his leader image (if I had done the leader I would have done the stripes differently) 01:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you for referencing Ivystripe 02:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Alright. Blur the lighter part of his fur a bit more. 02:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 23:37, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Umm nobody's commented in three days... bad? 21:45, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Defione the stripes, blur and darken the shading, and smudge the ear pink into the pelt. 00:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

All right, this definitely isn't enough stripes... Also, the stripe closest to his back leg shouldn't be curved. 00:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay ivystripe gave me that redline so.. Take it up with her >_>;; I'll reupload this tomorrow anyway. 03:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Eww >_> 00:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink to make it look more realistic. <span style="">18:32 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Is that better? 20:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading into the pelt. 22:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading please. <span style="">16:14 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded >_>;;; 17:16, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I have an issue with that stripe closest to his back leg. I looked at this "redline" Ivy gave to you and it's not nearly as curved on there. Fix it. In addition, the eyes should be a brighter green. 00:19, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used layers and re-did it :D 01:56, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink by making it paler and make the stripes pointier. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:59, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail >_< 03:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a pale underbelly and everything should be lightened. 16:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  21:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh underbelly color fail >_< 01:41, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the underbelly and brighten the whole thing, his leader is positively flamey :3 Also, define the "highlights". 03:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the belly more pale orange, less yellow. 20:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ For Approval
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. <span style="">07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 00:22, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And smooth the shading too. It is blotchy in some places. <span style="">05:47, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Make the color match the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and tone down the highlights if you use them. Breeze whisker  21:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Starforce? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If Starforce isn't, may I work on this? 01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, not yet. It hasn't been a week. They get a full seven days. 02:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading. -- 00:11, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Starforce gave me permission to do this. I'll reupload ASAP 14:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail :P 01:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" tons, it needs to be lighter, and seriously smudge the earpink down. :3 03:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There's no highlights' to define. Add highlights to the face and front haunch. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:30, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image so it matches the MC better, darken the shading, add shading to the herbs, and take the earpink color from the MC. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:40, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dovewing (A) ~ For Approval
Not sure i like this... 15:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make her lighter. Take the colors right from her warrior image. 15:26, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I did take the colors straight from her but gaussian blur broke her :( So I simply had to dodge it. REUPLOADED, changes aren't showing, I think :P 15:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink please. Also correct me if I'm worng but the shading looks like it's in the wrong places, kind of like just a big streak going across her body. Look at the shading placement in the apprentice tutorials if you need help. <span style="">22:43, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Yes it is wrong. There needs to be shading onher back hanch and across her spine should be shading not highlights. Just making things specific :3 <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest taking a look here for where the shading goes. <span style="">23:35 Fri Dec 9

The eyes don't look pale golden to me...did you take that from her warrior? Make sure you add depth to her eyes as well  20:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes as well. 20:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't the eye style artists choice? 02:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Eye style is but shading an eye isn't style. Without shading it just looks flat and that's not realistic. 04:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Message from Loudy(I'm Loudy's real life friend): I'll reupload it as soon as possible.

Ah, okay. Sorry for the mishap. (and sorry that I am posting nonsense comments right now xD)  20:20, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">12:07 Tue Dec 13

Um....Blue here, Loudy needed me to get on her computer and upload this because she has a softball tournament today. 12:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Either the base pelt or shading needs to be lightened, me thinks. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 03:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:24, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, 5 words: I. Hate. The. Blur. Tool. 17:10, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the charart; Dovewing is a pale gray cat - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">00:21 Fri Dec 16

The shading doesn't really make sense right now. Try looking at the apprentice tutorial for a redline of how it's supposed to go. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:53, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a tad. 20:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Loudsplashy? - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  03:01, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I am, and I don't see any problem with the shading placement as I followed it exactly... 13:52, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight on her shoulder and the hind paw furthest from us needs shading and she still needs to be paler. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  21:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is the right shading placement, but the shading is too thick, needs to be thinner, image should be lightened. -- 20:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

She wanted me to reupload this for her. FerretclawLover 21:36, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt A.) ~ For Approval
Brackenfur was described as a ginger tom in Fire and Ice when he was an apprentice. Took the ear color for his warrior image. Comments? 21:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Realized I used the female lineart xD Removed the eyelash thing, but the changes aren't showing. 21:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little (as in color-wise) and blur the edges of them some more 21:40, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:54, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The back leg looks highlighted instead of shaded. I don't know if it was intentially but I'm just pointing it out. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for what the shading should look like, and saturate the image a bunch. <span style="">01:05 Sat Dec 10

I used the shading placement guide wildheart. The gaussian blur just made it look weird. 02:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the shading a tad and saturated the image. 12:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad more. 20:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes a tad. 02:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:17, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make him a bit redder? A bit more like Firestar. He looks golder-brown right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a tad more. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:09, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bunch. <span style="">20:13 Sat Dec 17

Define the ear-pink and maybe give him green eyes since he was mistakenly described with those too. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  03:03, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded All the changes are made now. 12:23, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

He needs to be much more ginger. Right now he kinda looks gingery-brown, and that's much too close to his actual description ^^ <span style="">01:20 Tue Dec 20

Also, define the earpink a whole bunch, I can barely see it. 03:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:02, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is too neon. If you want a good color example, my personal charart is a good example of a realistic color you can use =)  16:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Its also too red. Use Ivystripe's example color, and also define the stripes. 23:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ For Approval
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? <span style="">23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. <span style="">00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. <span style="">00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) <span style="">23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. <span style="">21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD <span style="">00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Doesn't everyone? ;) <span style="">23:22 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading and the highlights. 01:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and no offence, but the shading is blurred enough and to the max. <span style="">11:08 Thu Dec 15

Darken the shading, on the rump especially. And have you tried Gaussian blurring it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always use gaussian blur for shading. <span style="">00:56 Sat Dec 17

Darken the shading and blur it 22:07, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want to darken it, because it will turn out black. <span style="">22:13 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:07 Sun Dec 18

Darken the shading and blur it. Make sure you're using the pencil tool when you're drawing on the lineart for the torn ear, as right now some of the pixels are semi-transparent. <span style="">01:22 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded I did use the pencil, but I erased some of the ear off first. That's probably why. <span style="">18:56 Tue Dec 20

Darn it. I was hoping to get this once Bluestar's kit alt. I'm working on was approved, but, oh well. Anyways, this looks a little too gray, with not enough blue, to me. Bluestar11796 19:02, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe I wanted it too, so as soon as Frostfur's loner was approved I quick reserved it. I colour picked off one of her other image, so I'm not comfortable about changing it. <span style="">19:12 Tue Dec 20

Cloudpelt (A) - For Approval
Hmm, I must practice shadings more ,16:51,December 11,2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. Just make the nose pink, since white cats have pink noses. 16:57, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I like the shading, too. Cute! And, the deputy version has green eyes. :3 16:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its not green, but blue (Im going to tweak it and pre-made him). And I dont like white cats with blue eyes... Reuploaded ,17:00,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. =3 My bad. My eyes are obviously not very good. Blur the earpink. 17:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its ok, that eye is really small xD Reuploaded ,17:07,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Make the nose more pink. 19:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,20:30,December 11,2011 (UTC)

His eye colour should match the original image. Change it to blue. 02:15, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

NO ONE understands me there ,20:59,December 14,2011 (UTC)

I get what you mean Leaf, but just cause you're gonna tweak the deputy image, doesn't mean you should change the color of all of the eyes. There was nothing wrong with it before. But since you fixed them, CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:46, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt but I think the shading should be blurred/lightened more. <span style="">05:49, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

lightened? are you joking? I barely see tem on my PC ,21:06,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Perhaps blur then. <span style="">22:30, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Reuploaded ,12:24,December 17,2011 (UTC)

The earpink should actually be pink, should it not? Since he's white. 23:32, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, THIS is earpink from his warrior pic, Im not changing anything :-) reuploaded ,21:36,December 19,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and go over the placement. Right now it kinda looks like you tried to merge both of the examples in the apprentice tutorials. Choose one from the tutorials or make one of your own that has a definitive light source. Also lighten the eyes and reverse the depth in them so the darkest part is at the top. <span style="">01:28 Tue Dec 20

Its the shadings from example 1. I cant see nothing wrong and I think the shading needs to be darket because I cant see them on my computer and this means I cant blur them, Im sorry Wildy. reuploaded ,17:23,December 20,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. -- 21:00, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Your shading looks weird. Especially on the hind leg. Too much of the shading under the tail and behind got onto the thigh. Erase that so the thigh is lighter and your light source appears from behind like the rest of the image. Breeze whisker  00:18, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
Yay! My first charart I like it! =) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 17:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and stripes. 17:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, rename this Owlwhisker.apprentice.png and smudge the earpink. 17:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency ,17:32,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading for you. Add more shading too, and make the stripes a tad bigger to match the other image. 17:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Ivy, i wanted to do it xD Yes Acorn, also add more stripes and made them more real, i never seen before a cat with such less stripes. Warrior version is going do be tweaked, i think :-) ,17:37,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you Ivy. Geez I've drawn a blank how do you add transparency? Changes aren't showing. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 17:59, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you're using GIMP, select the white areas, then go to edit---> clear. If it doesn't become transparent then go to Layers--->Transparency--->add alpha channel 18:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken stripes and add more lighter of them and made M stripe on the head. ,18:12,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Can someone blur the shading for me? GIMP isn't working at the moment. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstorm can you make the transparency for me? Its not working for me. =/ Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 21:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added light highlights, does it look okay? Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 23:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

i make it transparent when you get CBA it, darken the shadings more ,16:12,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Unfortunately, we can't CBA if it's not transparent. But don't worry, I've done it for you :) Blur the shading/highlights. 00:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys I've been really busy I got my own computer today so I'll get right on it. :) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 02:09, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay now how does it look? =) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 22:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading more? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:21, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I defined the shading. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 01:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:32, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 00:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/define the stripes and brighten the ear-pink. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  03:06, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I got the earpink from his warrior charart, and Reuploaded. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:37, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or are some of the lines blurred? The lines inside the body don't have a crisp apperance imho 01:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can barely even see the stripes inside it, and even if i could I think they're too close together. 03:16, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes and blur them. 23:36, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Rubblepaw (A) ~ For Approval


So here he is. Rubblepaw. I rather like this one....so comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The eye closest to us looks kind of reddish. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you. Blur the highlights so it blends in with the shading. 22:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fire, i made his eyes amber, they are the same color; however, i'll try to fi it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops haha NOW I fixed the title XD sorry! 22:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * Edit Conflict xD* Reuploaded-Better? Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

That's not amber, it's orange. Make it more yellowy. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:57, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I figured his eyes were described as amber, but he doesn't have an eye color, so you can keep it orange. :P Blur the shading/highlights though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:58, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the eyes nevertheless xD. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, will do. xD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:39, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink more, there's this random ear-pink edge on > this end. Can you erase the ear-pink there and make it part of the pelt? <span style="">00:33 Tue Dec 13

That's how its supposed to be..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

No, Sweet's right. It's too far into the pelt. <span style="">01:16 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights (?) are blotchy. Smooth them out. <span style="">11:50 Thu Dec 15

How were they blotchy? I was sure I blurred it into oblivion! I don't get that. but, anyways, Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:32, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gray meets the ear pink. 22:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

They are. It looks like a splotch, with the colours around it going darker. Blur them more please. <span style="">22:27 Thu Dec 15

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the ear pink and the "highlights" look blotchy. The shading placement looks sort of odd, and blur it. 22:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, can you smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, it looks like it was blurred and not smudged. <span style="">23:05 Thu Dec 15

On the behalf of Sandstorm, I'll explain how to fix the highlights, since she did not. Blur and smooth them together into the pelt. 18:27, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I just re-did him and saved myself some time. I know he looks black, but that's because of the shading. And no highlights ont his one, btw. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and ear-pink. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  00:04, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement doesn't make any sense from what I can see. Make it look more like the apprentice tutorials. <span style="">01:11 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded-The shading doesnt ALWAYS have to match. That is why some people do highlights from the back. Doesnt always have to match, and this is how it is on Yellowfang's apprentice. So i didnt't change it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

No offense or anything, but Yellowfang's apprentice image's shading doesn't make any sense, and neither does this. If you can get the shading to look normal without matching the apprentice tutorials, then fine. However, right now, it doesn't look normal. It looks like you drew a line of darker colour over the top half of the image. So either match the apprentice tutorials or try something else that makes sense. Either way, redo the shading on this. <span style="">04:08 Sun Dec 18

For help with the shading, delete the shading on the haunch and shoulder, maybe the area around the eyes and if you want the top of the tail and the bottom of the paws. Add shading to the belly, chest and the legs furthest away from us. Blur it too. <span style="">05:55, Mon, Dec, 19, 2011

Give me a few days,okay? Lost all of his files on gimp.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:16, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing him,'cause i lost his files, and cant fix im...so...yeah, anyone can take over.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:05, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over, if nobody minds. ^^ . 02:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and don't forget to do what everybody else said. And you forgot to change the heading. 02:40, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Runningbrook (A) - For Approval
Well, I tried ,16:46,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Darken the shading a tad. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the shading on the back of the back xD <span style="">23:37 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded,18:51,December 13,2011 (UTC)

The paws are darken than everything else, wither make the shading darker everywhere but the paws, or make the paws lighter please. <span style="">02:11 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading a touch. <span style="">05:59, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Reuploaded,21:01,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and define the stripes. <span style="">20:46 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded,21:19,December 18,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 23:34, December 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * trying to match warrior char.* Oh now i see, its too dark, ok what do you think? ,21:48,December 19,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes a bunch and blur them. <span style="">01:32 Tue Dec 20

Im sorry, this is horrible ,27:14,December 20,2011 (UTC)

This isn't horrible. It looks great~ CBA? 23:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I disagree with CBA. The stripes should be lighter. 23:30, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (A) ~ CBA
Got all colors from original image. CommentS? 23:15, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">23:20 Mon Dec 12

Re-Uploaded. 23:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and darken it. <span style="">01:09 Wed Dec 14

Re-Uploaded. 01:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlights. <span style="">23:58 Wed Dec 14

I can't; then it won't show. It looks fine as it is. 22:51, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the tail shading and blur the haunch shading? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind leg. 20:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Its blurred as much as possible. 01:28, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and erase the waste. <span style="">12:21 Sun Dec 18

Re-Uploaded. 22:53, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading more and brush up on your placement, as right now I can't really see a definitive light source. <span style="">01:33 Tue Dec 20

There is a definitive light source. Its coming from the top/front right side. I copied the shading from Frogleap's apprentice image, and no one found anything wrong with the shading there. I'll darken the shading more, but thats as much as I'll do. 22:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I've defined the shading. Everything's blurred to the limit, and the shading seriously matches Frogleap's perfectly, and that one was approved, so I'm going to CBA this. 23:09, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">07:30, Tue, Dec, 13, 2011

I love this! Make the stripes wavy like his warrior image. <span style="">11:48 Tue Dec 13

It's a bit darker than his other images. Could you lighten it up a bit? 14:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. <span style="">08:01, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

Make the stripes a bit thinner on the head and body but not the tail or ankles. Those look perfect. Also give his highlights a tiny bit of a golden-yellow tint like his warrior. Great job! 15:32, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes don't go solidly over curves like shoulders like that. It should break where his elbow starts, not go right over the lineart like it's not there. 02:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Fail. <span style="">06:27, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Blur the stripes a little. 01:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make the stripes a bit wavier. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I don't know how much wavier the stripes can get without destroying the whole image. <span style="">09:16, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

The stripes need to be thinner at the ends and more wavy at the ends. Other than that... awesome job! <span style="">04:03 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded -  I hate wavy tabbies on apprentice blanks. <span style="">06:08, Mon, Dec, 19, 2011

Gonna go CBA on this one  16:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt, but there's waste all around the image. 23:13, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Shadepelt (A) - For Approval
Please don't say about the color, I had a hard time :( Grayflower10 16:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are you a member of the PCA? I don't see your name on the apprentice list.... And if I understand right, you can't post chararts unless you're a member. You can go join though. Anyways, lighten the whole image and get rid of the white specks on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

The front page of PCA says that non-members can donate art. And Gray actually reserved it, so it's fine I think. ^^ She's the first non-member I've seen do the thing right. 16:40, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I did ask to join :) Grayflower10 17:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fill those two white pixels on her forehead? 18:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the pelt into the earpink. 18:05, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement like the one on the tutorial. Som eof the placements are wrong. <span style="">02:09 Wed Dec 14

Shading placement is the artist's choice, Sweetflower. As long as it makes sense, we can't tell anyone to make it match the tutorial. 02:59, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please make the earpink look pink. 19:49, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be pink, as the color is picked off the other images and dark gray/black cats often have gray inner ears. 01:35, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are a couple of pixels by the ear. -- 07:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? <span style="">20:48 Sat Dec 17

Quailflight, do not repeat what's already been said, please. If this has already been said, ignore me: lighten the entire image. Also, lighten up the shading just a tad. 14:11, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Please note that you have two days left to re-upload this before it is declined for lack of work. 17:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The Wiki clock is officially midnight, I don't think the user is going to work on this, so it's declined. Anyone with a free project may take over  00:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll take over! Just got an opening, I'll upload it ASAP. :) 00:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm editing the reservation chart to put Shadepelt on mine, so should I delete Grayflower's reservation for her? 00:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, as this is no longer hers  01:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

...You deleted my comment. :3 Anyway, what I said was I redid it and uploaded it, and I tried to get the colors close to the other character pixels. And I did change it on the chart. :) Um...comments? 02:52, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, fixed highlights. 00:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 12:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! He should have more stripes. 12:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Icestorm has dibs on this image, did you get permission to do this image? 16:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even if you were allowed to, hmm. The eye needs more contrast in shades, and needs to be a tiny tad less neon Define the shading just a bit. 17:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm isn't active right now, so I don't know if she would be able to lay claim to any of her images. Try and thin out the middle of the stripes on the tail by a pixel or two. Also, the eyes look like they're blue with a tint of green. Did you color pick right from the warrior/deputy? 19:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even know Icestorm had dibs on the image... I actually just chose the color, since his eyes are an ice blue shade. 20:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon and add depth to them. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Move the stripes on his haunch closes to his head up further and make the top one longer. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)'''

Make the eyes less neon. 23:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (A) - For Approval
Posting this for Brightstripes because she can't edit the page yet. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 13:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading a tad. 18:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink to give it a bit more of a realistic look. 18:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" on the haunch and shoulder a bit bigger. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it;s making her look black almost. <span style="">17:26 Sat Dec 17

Are you still working on this? And Sweet, Loudbelly is a boy =p  16:44, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit. 18:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Creekfeather (A) ~ For Approval
Ugh...sloppy. I dun like this one. Please please please tell me it needs improvements! I'm fine if you decline this one; it's horrible. 14:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a lot. 15:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

We don't decline chararts based on how they look or our personal opinions on them. You're just being hard on yourself. Make the nose a tad bit darker and blur the haunch shading some 18:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, as they say, our worst critic is ourselves. Blur the stripes just a tad. 18:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and blur the edges of the stripes a lot, actually. Notice how they're not as visible on the Warrior image as they are on here? If you need help, don't be afraid to ask. 19:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. And redden it a bit too. 19:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hmm...still sloppy, but I like it better! =D 23:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes, especially on main part of the body. I used the "Circle 03" brush on GIMP to make the stripes, if that helps you. 03:04, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Had to redo the entire thing to get the stripes thinner, and I appreciate the help, only I use Pixlr. 07:31, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I use pixlr too, so I understand your pain. However, I feel like the stripes on the tail are a bit unnatural, and that they could be blurred a bit more. I find it easier just to continue blurring until it looks good. Really good though! 08:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Um. I had dibs on this image. I'm not going to take it from you (I'm being nice) but be more careful next time you reserve an image. <span style="">20:59 Sat Dec 17

Wildheart, wasn't that rule removed? 21:43, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure, as there was a lot of discussion and debate on it (discussion and debate that seems to have disappeared), but I think it was put into place in the end. <span style="">21:45 Sat Dec 17

Ah ha! Found it. <span style="">21:49 Sat Dec 17

I thought it was decided we could claim like 2-3 images if we want to? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:07, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Stop debating under this poor persons image and gp read the discussion page. 23:25, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. Hehe, missed that...anyways, Quailflight, reuploaded. 23:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Needs a gray nose  01:52, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ugh, my cat walked on my computer just before I uploaded, so I had to redo the upload. *Mutter mutter* 04:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be larger and more smudged together, as well as more curved on the shoulder and haunch. Darken the shading a lot, and add some depth to the eyes. <span style="">05:05 Sun Dec 18

Derp I don't mean add depth to the eyes, I mean reverse the depth in the eyes, as the bone above their eyes juts out and casts shadow on the top of the eye, not the bottom. <span style="">05:07 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded. Like that? 07:09, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I'm a Derp, reuploaded again. :P 08:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Better. The contrast in the eyes could be a bit more intense, and the stripes still need to be smudged more. The pelt should be smudged into the earpink as well, and the shading still needs to be darker. <span style="">09:52 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded. That's as much as I can smudge the stripes without messing up the lineart or messing up the whole pelt. -.- 10:56, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry to be such a stickler, but if you look at this image compared to the warrior image, you can see that the warrior image is much more smudged. My advice: make sure your lineart is on a different layer so you don't smudge it, and then lock the background. Then take your brush (circle fuzzy 03 or maybe 05) and smudge the stripes all in the same direction. Go crazy with smudging until the smudgies look more like the warrior image. <span style="">10:59 Sun Dec 18

Ugh...this is gonna take a while before I can reupload. I use Pixlr, I can't get the lineart on another layer. It'll just hide all the color. :( 12:18, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

A while being...? A couple days? A week? Do you want to withdraw it for now, but keep the reservation so you can work on it and post it when you think it's perfect? It would free up room for other images so we can get all these apprentices done quickly. <span style="">12:33 Sun Dec 18

I like the sound of that. I'll re-post this later on, but I'm withdrawing for now. Honestly, this might take up to...a week maximum, I'm guessing. Okay, the image is withdrawn. I'm keeping my reservation, I'm just withdrawing for right now. Please no one take up the image (wow I sound like a hypocrite, don't I?). 12:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch the above, actually. Wild, you can take up the image. I've decided not to do it, as I've already got a better one in mind. This time I chose very carefully. 12:26, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

When you withdraw, please make sure to change the heading to reflect this  19:53, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 -- 00:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one! :D -- 00:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is great, but I'm about to spoil your fun :( The stripes need to curve with the body much more and they're going the wrong way  00:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (MCA) - For Approval
Please, someone remind me never to copy a complicated tabby again DX. I do not like this at all. The stripes all fail. 19:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white. 20:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure this needs to be uploaded over the old file. 20:33, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It does. Don't put caps on mca. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white blends into the brown. Also, there is a lack of shading on the neck and chest. 21:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing, but still, Reuploaded. I really hate this image. 10:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The changes weren't showing 'cause you forgot to change the image name XD I fixed it for you. Try to make the stripes lighter and match the warrior image more closely <span style="">12:37 Sun Dec 18

Blur the stripes. 23:11, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (P3) (A) - For approval
Not sure uploading this will work. If it doesn't, let me try again. Anyway, that was quick. Comments? 19:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay it worked. :3 20:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  20:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, so sorry Cloudskye! I tried to edit, it restored changes and I clicked publish before I reallized it deleted your edit. Well, I changed the name, anyway. 20:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It happens. I changed the file name at the top of the page for you. Now, darken the shading just a tad. 20:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Re-uploaded. Fixed shading. 20:24, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

In the fold in his neck, there appears to be some lighter pixils than the surrounding pelt. Make sure they match ^^ 22:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:14, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. <span style="">01:28 Sat Dec 17

In what way...? 03:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

She fixed the heading for you. The link probably wasn't correct or something. Enlarge the "highlight" on the face and blur all the shading. <span style="">21:05 Sat Dec 17

No, it didn't say: (A). There's gray lineart on both of the ears. <span style="">00:35 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded 01:50, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

There's still smudged lineart. ;) <span style="">15:25 Sun Dec 18

If you need help, I could get it. <span style="">18:06 Sun Dec 18

No that's fine, I just din't have wifi for a little while. Um... I'll try again. Wait...how should I fix it? Where exactly? I'm a little confused how to fix it, I'm sorry. :( 02:30, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay reuploaded, did my best, did I fix it? *is hopeful* :3 02:38, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This ---> ear. If you can't get it I will. <span style="">22:34 Mon Dec 19

I'm so sorry, I don't know how to fix it. Could you? If you help, will this not count in the future as one of the three chararts that I did myself approved to become a warrior? 00:37, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay so I looked at the Reservation chart to get Shadepelt, and it said that I still had Hollyleaf apprentice (It's been approved) and that Thistlepaw was a tweak. Um, I'm just going to change that, unless people say otherwise. If not, it was a mistake. 00:42, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think it wouldn't count to becoming a warrior. But I'll fix it. <span style="">18:54 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded <span style="">19:49 Tue Dec 20

Blackstar (A) ~ For Approval
Here he is...I hate the earpink and the paws...! <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black paws 23:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also lighten them a touch, I can almost not see the lineart 23:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black part on the right ear a bit. Lovely! ^_^ 23:05, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''RE-UPLOADED. '''I darkened the ear-pink a bit too! <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  00:30, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the smudged ear-pink more realistic. <span style="">00:53 Sat Dec 17

The earpink is a little...bright...The correct color for white would be this:. 01:12, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, if you want to give her a colour example, you would go to the tutorials and you'll see there's an explanation there. I put a delete tag on your image you uploaded, as it's just taking up space. <span style="">01:15 Sat Dec 17

I asked if it was okay before I edited it, because i figured that it would be okay, since it's so small. And it's easier to post, instead of posting the link and giving instructions, and then Fire having to use snipping tool to get the image, put it on gimp or pixlr, and color choose the image. Firestar would just have to copy the mage and paste, then color choose. But okay, whatever, do what you want with that image as I didn't quite understand what you meant by putting a delete tag on it. 03:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. :D <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, if you go to the tutorial and read what it said, you can see that it is much easier than what you described. Anyways, smudge the paws so it looks more natural and the colors flow into one another better. Also, blur the earpink. Nice work. 04:07, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I failed at the paws :P <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:22, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, Firestar. Smudge the black in with the pelt on the closest ear. 19:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading as well. 19:11, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  23:27, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the ear-pink a tad more. Bootiful, and i mean it rowan :) PRESENT TIME!  Give me them!  01:44, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Thanks Rainy, that means alot! <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The haunch highlight is a little...triangular. Also, smudge the earpink into the pelt more. It looks great! :) 02:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Sorry it's so ugly. Just noticed that i need to darken the base color, apologies. Feedback? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 16:52, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Color in the nose, blur the shading and darken it, and the earpink looks a little too neon. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 16:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

add transparency to it - 17:04, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also smudge/blur the stripes more. 19:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Get all the colours off his kit or warrior image. <span style="">19:47 Sat Dec 17

And blur the highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't do highlights. And I did take off the colors, or else it'll upload odd. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 23:29, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

You obviously didn't take the colours off his images. This needs to be a whole lot darker, and are you going to do anything else said? 23:38, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

You need to take the colors off of a neutral spot on the picture, not on the highlighted parts. Breeze whisker  00:35, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Color the nose and add some depth in the shading; it's really flat. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:38, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 16:42, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">16:58 Sat Dec 17

Define the shading a little, I think you over-blurred it. Breeze whisker  17:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just lowered the layer's opacity for the shading, because I blur at like 20. So I darkened it now. <span style="">18:16 Sat Dec 17

Mind lightening the eyes just a bit? They look a little brown. 19:03, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I see whatcha mean. I lightened them. Actually I made them more orange, and less brown, I hope that's ok. <span style="">19:51 Sat Dec 17 Blur the shading a bit Sweet. 22:02, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">22:28 Sun Dec 18

Smooth out the shading on the back and add some shading on <-- this side of the face. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  03:09, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:42 Mon Dec 19

Blur the shading. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  21:44, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:58 Mon Dec 19

Be sure to make the shading go all the way to the lineart. Currently, your shading pattern does not. Once you've done that I'll probably CBA this =)  01:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also blur the shading and add a line of "highlights" on the tail. Add some depth to the eyes, too. <span style="">01:39 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded There is depth in the eyes. o.O <span style="">19:01 Tue Dec 20

Stonestream (A) - For Approval
Phew. Just made it. Anyway, I must be obesessed with the male apprentice blanks. =P Comments? 18:49, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. <span style="">19:21 Sat Dec 17

You took my spot. xD Add a little more shading on the belly, mostly near the haunch :) 19:30, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why you take the last spot?? >.> Blur the shading to blend in more with the unshaded parts. 19:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail. 06:29, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 00:29, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (A) ~ For Approval
Here she is, comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  23:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  23:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:48, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  23:55, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 00:13, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  00:24, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it a bit more. <span style="">00:38 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  00:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Now blur it a little bit? And maybe lighten the shoulder and thigh. Breeze whisker  02:00, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  15:43, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Please smudge both sides of the earpink into the ear  01:55, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (A) ~ CBA
Comments? 01:12, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:14, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:18, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" (I know you don't use them, but where the highlights would be) and...smudge the pelt into the earpink. Maybe make the nose the tiniest bit pinkr? It looked better pinker on Hollyleaf(A). 01:41, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink is fine, and black cats have black noses. Not changing it, sorry. Re-uploaded. 01:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bunch. Looks good. <span style="">03:53 Sun Dec 18

Ear pink is straight from his elder. I still have the .xcf. Not changing it. If you'd bother to look at his elder, you would see the ear pink color. =P 14:07, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Dangs, this is better then his kit image which i took care of. Define the shading just a tad more. Bootiful. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  22:05, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I can't. Computer spazzed and I lost teh layers. xD 15:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Then redo it :P Doesn't matter how you do it, the shading needs to be defined. Also, the earpink looks normal on the elder because it's blurred all the way around. Since you obviously can't do that on this one, try smudging the pelt colour into the earpink really far. <span style="">02:49 Tue Dec 20

Actually, it looks fine to me. I'm CBA'ing it  17:59, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Snooky (A)~ For Approval
Comments? 01:14, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, so very cute! <3 Lighten the shading? 01:39, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, define the tail shading. <span style="">01:55 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded- 07:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Alt. A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">04:41 Sun Dec 18

Is this gray and white? If so, can you lighten the gray? I love the white placement. <3 04:45, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :3 I think it's supposed to be black and white. <span style="">04:47 Sun Dec 18

I just checked. It's supposed to be gray and white. 04:48, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm a derp. She was described as black (as a kit) and then gray and white as an apprentice, and I somehow merged those two alts XD I'll lighten it a bunch gimme a sec. <span style="">04:52 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded <span style="">04:54 Sun Dec 18

Awesome! Blur the shading a tad. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  04:55, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Was she described with green eyes? If so, just ignore my comment. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 04:56, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

No, she wasn't described with green eyes, but I think it's the artist's choice if it's an alt, isn't it? I mean, it's a completely different description, so why keep the eye colour? (I'll blur the shading after the eye-colour thing is resolved) <span style="">04:59 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded I'll fix the eyes if somebody else agrees with Sky :3 <span style="">06:58 Sun Dec 18

I have to agree with Sky on this one. Her alt. kit has amber eyes, so this alt. should have them too. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  13:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is supposed to be grey-and-white, I believe? Lighten the grey. 23:41, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It is gray and white :3 I lightened the gray a little bit, but it never specifies the shade of gray so... <span style="">00:52 Tue Dec 20

I love grey-and-white cats. Could you blur the haunch and tail shading? 18:35, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A) - For Approval
I figured since I'm redoing his warrior, I might as well do his apprentice. Especially since I'm the OA and I hate the old image. Comments? <span style="">10:14 Sun Dec 18

Blur the shading on his head a bit, and maybe define the structure of it if you want. Breeze whisker  00:29, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken the stripes just tiny bit? It's a lovely image, Wildheart. ^^ 02:15, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Shelly. Breeze: I didn't really know what you meant by define the structure, so I just kinda played around with it and this is what I got. <span style="">01:00 Tue Dec 20

It looks really good, I love it! <3 The highlights make it look like there is a lump or bump right below the top of his back. 03:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Featherwillow. The "highlight" (I don't actually use highlights) on the top of his back is where the light hits him because his haunch blocks the part of the light. So it's not a bump, it's just there's a dip and the light doesn't hit the dip. If that makes any sense whatsoever... :P <span style="">03:56 Tue Dec 20

Whitewing (A) ~ For Approval
Here she is, my first charart as a warrior, hope you like her. 13:50, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">15:32 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded 22:48, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it more. 23:42, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:02, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This probably sounds contradicting, but lighten the base fur colour if you can. She looks grey right now. 00:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up her rump a bit. Breeze whisker  00:31, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:44, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes and enlarge the "highlights" on her haunch and shoulder. <span style="">02:53 Tue Dec 20

Harespring (A) ~ For Approval
Okay, I copied his warrior image best I can.. I only blurred the patches a bit so it would really match the other images. 13:55, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:46, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink so its not so purplish. 00:27, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  00:35, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrytail (A) ~ For Approval
I just realized I made her long haired.. Idiot me. I will fix that this second. xD 15:43, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nicely done! Define the shading. 21:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The ginger looks kinda...green. Colo pick off her warrior. Her warrior also looks like it has a texture. 01:54, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, I had to re do it, and I tried to copy the image best I could.. How does this look? 03:40, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

smudge the patches more to make it look furry like the warrior image - 21:04, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, hows this? I only did it to a few patches, or else some would look to faded and weird.. 22:32, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the patches more, and define the shading. Also smudge where the black goes into the white parts. And...smudge the pelt into the earpink more. :) 02:38, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (A) ~ For Approval
Not gonna lie, I really like this one. All of the colors are from his elder and I tried to make the stripe like it. I'm pretty sure he should have a flat face but it doesn't say that in his description. Comments? 15:44, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tad more - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  16:08, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  16:31, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Someone mistakenly took out the flat muzzle in his description. I put it back. Please flatten his face. 16:59, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

It is flattened. I wasn't sure if I should have kept it that way. Should I make it flatter? 17:01, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make it more visible. Or just leave it if I'm blind. 17:59, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried to change the posistion of the mouth to make it more flat. 19:15, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the curve in the end more sudden and sharp. It just looks like a normal tail right now, just in a different position from the normal blanks. Make it look m ore broken, as he is named for that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:14, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Before I actually thought it looked too bent compared to his elder. But you're right. It worked out because I needed to fix the lines on the tail. How does this look? 01:26, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading some? This is amazing, great job as always 01:52, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much Ivy :D 04:03, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make his hair stick out a bit more where his tail is broken? He's described with unusually long fur, so it should stick out at least as much as the rest of his fur. 04:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:24, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. I meant the outside curve, not the inside. My bad! 05:32, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  05:45, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (A) - For Approval
Yeah, eww....comments? 15:50, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cute ^.^ Blur the stripes and define the shading on the tail. 19:46, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fill the white pixels on the tail. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  20:29, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

There is also white pixels between the closest front leg and the stomach. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas &amp; Hannukah to all!  20:34, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Put some more shading on his neck. Breeze whisker  22:27, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaeded. 02:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

it doesn't really match his warrior... The stripes are thicker and blacker, and not blurred as much. 00:56, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, as a matter of fact, It looks less like his warrior than my old one. :( Sorry...the gray is paler, the stripes are black and in a different shape, less smudged and blurred, and there's less shading... 02:36, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The gray is fine, just add some highlights if you want to match the warrior. My tip: put the highlight (if you're using one) under the stripes layer to avoid turning the stripes gray. 02:45, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ahhh. I guess that's what kept mine getting gray no matter how black I made them. :3 I should've put the stripes above the highlights, that makes sense. I thought about that but never did it. 02:55, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Keep in mind, Featherwillow, that ''more is not better. ''I have absolutely no passion for this image any longer besides dislike. Do what the hell you want with it. >.> 16:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Atelda can I take this over? 16:49, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Of course. =3 16:52, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Taking this over. This was a LOT harder than I imagined. Comments? 17:12, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

B'awww he looks cute. Blur his highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:22, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Maple :D I changed some of the lines on the shoulder. It looked pretty messed up. 17:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Runningnose (MCA) ~ For Approval
Comments? 02:52, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is adorable, Shelly! Make the highlight on the face stretch a bit further this way --> across the forehead and make the haunch highlight a bit bigger. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:55, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

His grey looks a bit darker all over on his other images. It's also more smudged. Other than that, he's gorgeous. Breeze whisker  02:58, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Adorable <3 Define the shading on the tail. 06:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job, Shelly. Add some more depth to the eyes. <span style="">03:00 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded. 16:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the head. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  20:12, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think he'd have patchy fur as an apprentice? It's up to you, but maybe he was born with it. 23:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpaw (SC) - For Approval
The only thing I want to know is what brown cat has ginger flecks... 11:51, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

To me, the flecks kind of look like stripes. 19:48, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's the point o3o There's also background flecks. 20:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Why do you want them to look like stripes? Anyways, define the earpink a bit and make the eyes less neon. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:14, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't really want them to look like stripes. I drew them in Paint like flecks - they were separated - but once I blurred them they kind of came out looking like stripes. I actually really like the image this way, and to be honest I'd rather not change it. 00:49, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I like how it looks, too, but to be honest, he doesn't look like a flecked cat at all. Try to define the flecks so they look like flecks, and reverse the depth in the eyes so the darkest part is at the top. <span style="">03:02 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded. Is the eye not my choice? I know it makes more sense like you said it, but I like my eyes this way. 12:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

My cat has ginger flecks. She's a brown tabby. She has a splodge on her head and little bits on her shoulders. They fade out as they get further down her body and then become stripes on her legs.--Cynthia-may 16:07, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Graystripe (A) - For Approval
Here's Graystripe (Graypaw at the time)! I like this. I'm sorry I didn't get around to posting it earlier... Purplemoon  <font color="FF6699">Four candles 6 days!  14:38, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I got the earpink, stripe, eye, and pelt colors from his warrior charart. Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Four candles 6 days!  16:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, fix the nosse. Define the earpink on the ear closest to us. Blur the shading. 16:41, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded As I told you before, I got the earpink from Graystripe's warrior charart. I have no idea what happened to the nose. I blurred the shading as much as I could. Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Four candles 6 days!  17:50, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I realized I didn't crop it enough... Purplemoon  <font color="FF6699">Four candles 6 days!  17:54, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

The color of his nose needs to be darker than his pelt 19:47, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Heh heh, I forgot.. Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Four candles 6 days!  00:24, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dang I wanted him! Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a little more. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas &amp; Hannukah to all!  02:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, Graypaw is uber cute!! <3 blur the shading more, and make the "highlights" bigger. 02:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think the "highlights" are fine as they are (except the shoulder one, which should be bigger) but the shading does need to be blurred, as well as darkened. <span style="">03:04 Tue Dec 20

Patchpelt (A) ~ For Approval
Oh, he's so purty <3 16:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful~ <3 Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 16:14, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, changes should probably show once I publish this edit... 16:21, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Those black patches should be smaller; he has a lot more white on his warrior. 19:44, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

And define them a bit, too. Breeze whisker  22:09, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white and smudge the earpink into the ear. Also darken the shading. <span style="">01:20 Tue Dec 20

Birchfall (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
Finally. A space. Comments, concerns? 20:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Theres a patch missing on his toe on the far right leg (our right). 20:24, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make his eyes less brown and more yellow. 01:08, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more and reverse the shading in the eyes so the darkest part is at the top. <span style="">01:18 Tue Dec 20

Ivytail (SC) (A) - Withdrawn
Ugh...Not a fan of this. Comments? 20:33, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, define the shading a tad. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  20:37, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you, and I can see some white pixls on the front hindleg and one on the back foreleg. Unless my eyes are just bad =) otherwise beautiful Twi! Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan!  21:16, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the patches and add some variety in the color. Make the ear-pink a bit paler. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  21:17, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes. <span style="">01:16 Tue Dec 20

I'm sorry, but, I can't do this. 1) I lost the file when my computer broke again (Still have Stonestream) and 2) I generally don't like this image. 16:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mind if I take over? 22:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Spiderleg (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 20:36, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up his belly a tad 20:38, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely, blur the shading a tad. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  20:43, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat a tad and darken the shading slightly. Nice job! <span style="">01:15 Tue Dec 20

Reuploaded. This is so ugly. 16:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

No critisizing your own work. :D Great work! Just blur the shading more. 00:25, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Pinenose - For Approval
Eh... well comments? 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Pinenose is a girl...and shorthaired. o3o 15:34, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *headdesk* 15:53, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Her ear farest from us, is pale gray, almost dark gray, make it black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it was....forget that. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:09, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the belly shading, since the paws have dark shading, and the shading would make more sense if you did darken it. 18:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Green eyes, Atelda o3o 22:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (A) - For Approval
Well, I tried... Comments? - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  15:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste near his chin/chest and his hind leg closest to us. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  20:08, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (A) - For Approval
Comments? - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  15:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink a tad. Besdies that, I see nothing to improve. 17:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Aww... Thanks, Shelly! :) - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  20:10, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (A) ~ For Approval


UGH this is such a fail DX Took all colors from his Warrior image, and highlights are coming from the back. *hangs head in shame* Fail fail fail fail fail! I tried to smudge...and got a major fail....Dont look at my shame DX! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black into the white a lot and add shading, because I can't see any. 16:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay. *bags head* I hate this image DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:35, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The black on his head needs to be touching the corner of his eyes like on his leader image. And lengthen the tail. 18:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

One thing, I can't make his tail longer, for stuff like that, I use Pixirl, and his tail touches the end of the box. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can do it for you if you email me the file with layers. Neneshell@gmail.com. 18:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't use files on this one, for fear i'd lose them like i did with Rubblepaw.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So how are you editing it? If you don't have the file, how can you make changes, besides redoing it each time you exit? 19:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, like no, i have the one file that's his image, but i didn't do layers like a layer for his color and earpink and shaidng and stuff, and just did that on the one thing. Like I opened up the blank, and took the black, drew on his patches, filled in the patches, and then darkened the white a bit, added shading and highlights, the blurred everything, and added his eyes color. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

And i did this one on Pixirl....not Gimp, 'cause Gimp is being spazzy for me atm. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

You have to save the image as an .xcf, I believe - if it's the same on Pixlr - for the layers to save. Doing everything on one layer is not a good idea. For example, what if someone asked you to lighten the patch, which I was going to? You can't just use the dodge tool, or it'd lighten the lineart as well. I can't tell you how to make your chararts, but I can advise you to use layers. 22:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, no matter what the tail does need to be lengthened to match his leader blank. 23:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) ~ For Approval
My least favorite charart :\ FerretclawLover 16:24, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Why, shes cute! Smudge her ear-pink into her ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Define the tail shading a tad. 18:16, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REUPLOADED, the reason is that she just isn't up to what I call the Icewish Standard. She's average :\ FerretclawLover 18:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more on either side of where you've already smudged it 20:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, is this what you mean? I got a little confused so I just did what I think you're saying...FerretclawLover 20:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Furzepelt (A) ~ For Approval
I feel I need to do more WindClan cats. Comments? 16:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white patches. 20:08, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The white points on her white patch look a little too pointy. Maybe blur them a lot? FerretclawLover 20:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Um...I think some of the white is smudged in the wrong direction. Smudge the white above her haunch more up and down her back (aka smudge it left to right in our perspective) This is adorable though =3 23:26, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Guys, Stone said that above. You don't need to repeat the same critiques. Darken the shading a tad, Shelly. She's pretty. ^^ Breeze  whisker  00:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)