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Frogtail (Ki) ~ For Approval
Firetail is back... with Frogkit this time! I used PAINT.NET and colorpicked from his apprentice image, comments? (P.S. this is technically my first charart again since Dustkit got declined) Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 00:18, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's texture... ? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:22, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be texture or not? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 21:55, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

It's a soft mottle-like texture. Which it looks really neat and if anyone nominates it for that I'm gonna like, idk, feed you to the Dark Forest or something.

So I guess I'll just scribble at paintbrush size 4 or something and blur to get mottled texture. Again, everything is from the apprentice image. IDK I guess it looks more like brindled right now. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 23:17, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups - How's this for mottles? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 02:07, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Really nice. :) define the shading everywhere. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:10, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

That looks really nice for your first! I agree with Fox Girl, please define the shading. 15:37 Sat Jan 24

Reups Done Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 00:23, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and <== leg. 00:38 Sun Jan 25

His nose is hot pink. Sure of it. Make it a little light, please. ~ ☾Brambleshade The Cookie Monster  is out for you!

Good design.. really wish mine didn't get declined but oh well.. well done! :) Flameclaw1 (talk) 17:41, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make the nose the same color as the earpink. Make the earpink a little pinker though, it looks almost orange. 12:31 Mon Jan 26

Reups - Fixed earpink/nose and defined shading on leg + tail. Flameclaw, you will be fine with more practice. That's what I've been doing since I joined PCA - practice, practice, practice. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:54, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is kinda bright now. Tone it down to where you can tell that it's pink, but it's a dark pink. You can always look at images for reference. Also, define the light on the legs. 00:19 Tue Jan 27

The nose should be black. otherwise, good image! ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:29, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the colour of the Ear Pink. ~ ☾Brambleshade The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! January 27, 2015 23:06 (UTC)

Already said that, Brambleshade. Define the light on the tail and the legs. <span style="">12:38 Wed Jan 28

Define the light on the tail.-- 02:05, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Can we stop repeating comments? It's getting annoying. Anyway, could you blur the ear pink more? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:24, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Damn, i didnt even see Gia's comment. My bad. What i said still stands, though. 10:07, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:20, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

The back shading is actually leaking a little bit as well. <span style="">21:22 Sun Feb 1

The ==> back foot shading is leaking, too. | <span style="">12:53 Mon Feb 2

Withdrawing because I'm busy on Hungry Shark Wiki and, I am horrible at lightening/fixing the leaking on shading, too. I'll leave it to someone else with more experience and I'll hope I can get an easier image to do in the future. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM

I'll take over. 02:19, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Uploaded. Operation: Mottle-like texture is now a go. Comments? 02:58, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink and could you make him a tad lighter? He looks black. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:03, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading pretty much everywhere. The shading also looks like its leaking on the ==> back foot. <span style="">12:39 Tue Feb 3

Re-uploaded. I put the earpink on top of the shading, since for some reason it gets lost underneath it. I defined the shading, but just so you guys know that's what makes him look "black", but honestly he looks dark gray to me, and I also colorpicked from his warrior and his apprentice images, so I'm going to wait for a second opinion on that one. And finally, that is not leaking shading, that is the little bit of light he gets from in between his legs. It was completely intentional, and it's how I shade every one of my kits, and no one has ever had a problem with it. Sorry if I seem a bit rough, I'm a little extra pissy this morning due to my schoolwork..(And I think pissy is allowed publicly, right? Like damn?) 15:23, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the texture flow more with the direction of the fur? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:15, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

It was done exactly like this on the apprentice..so may I get another opinion on that? I don't want to change something so huge, because I tried to match the apprentice's design exactly. 02:19, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. <span style="">12:30 Wed Feb 4

He looks quite dark compared to his other images... Perhaps lighten him up a tad? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:31, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That is as much as I am lightening him, as he's supposed to be dark gray not light gray. Which for future comments may I kindly point out that dark gray and black are pretty damn close, and dark gray is only two to three shades lighter than black? Plus if I lighten him anymore there will most-likely be no more visible texture. Thanks. 10:39, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

You think you could define the shading a touch on the tail? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:47, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Snowflake (Ki) ~ For Approval
Best attempt at texture. ^^ 03:06, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to this ==> leg. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading and blur the neck shading a little. 22:45, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste above the <== ear, and blur the shading a bit. <span style="">19:52 Thu Jan 22

There's no waste, actually o_O my phone was showing something completely different <span style="">22:38 Thu Jan 22

Define the shading, please. i literally can't see any.-- 21:37, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink on the <== ear a little more. <span style="">02:48 Sun Jan 25

Re-upped 15:39, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. The back paw tells me it's coming from <== here and the rest ==> there. Also, add more shading to ==> leg. She/he looks good! ^^ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:30, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 01:44, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding some more depth to the shading, especially near the haunch area. 19:39, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit more, please.-- 02:04, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:59, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

I spy some waste by that left paw, and the space between the chest fluff and the tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:22, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 03:55, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:32, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

i still feel the neck shading needs more blurring. 13:50, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

I agree^^ and please define the light on the two front legs. 14:04, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (Alt. K) ~ For Approval
I know most of these comments might be bout the spots. But don't you think she pretty? (I love her. Its better than my last Charart.)  <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 06:09, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Please remove the collar- she was seen without it in the back of SkyClan's Destiny.

Reups

Tiiiiiimmnnnnnyyyyyyy writing! Maybe put in some more spots, or make some of them bigger. -- 06:40, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

You need this reserve d. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 06:42, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

Oh Crap! I forgot!! D: How did you reserve it fo me last time, Foxy? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

Right, go to the main page, there's a table full of names and stuff, then find your username, and write the character you're doing. So just write "Frecklewish (Alt Kittypet) ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:38, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Oh! I just did that! Haha well, thanks! Anymore comments for tonight? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 07:42 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere and add more light to the back. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:44, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:04 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. Add more light to the back. Adding light is to basically deleting shading. Right now, she looks like as if she was shading on the whole body. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:09, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest you to choose a different light source, don't chose the light source that gives all shading on the back. Also, defining means making the shading more visible, right now I can't even see it. See the other kittypets for reference. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:11, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups  <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:23 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see the shading. Try adding some light to the places where there are light. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:24, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:30 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see any change at all... ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:32, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm.. Lets try this again.. poohie. <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:33 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Gonna hit the hay. Im tired... <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:41 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink, please. 10:58, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a little bit too. Also, please define your light source more. Try adding white on a seperate layer over where the light is coming from, blurring it the same way you did your shading, and lower the opacity a lot. There's a tutorial on the Apprentice Tutorials page. <span style="">12:27 Mon Jan 26

She looks grey. Lighten her up and define the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:25, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I think I erased a little too much shading... I should darken the pots more.. huff <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 20:39 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. I can barely tell it's there. <span style="">00:25 Tue Jan 27

You're adding too much shading, delete some. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:29, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly I can't see any of the shading. Well, I can see where you put it. Let me help you; you need to put shading in the places where they would be hidden from the sun. First you have to choose a lightsource(i.e. the light is coming at him < like that, hitting the face, right ear, top of the legs and paws, top of the tail, and the back, which is sticking up because the cat is bent over) and make sure every part of the cat shaded, matches with your chosen lightsource. I recommend checking out some kittypet images that have already been approved, and notice the way they're shaded. Later I can make an example for ya, but honestly this is how you do it in a nutshell. I also recommend using gimp if you are not already, I've found it to be the most easiest program to work with, and trust me I've tried them all. But that is a personal preference, but I highly recommend it. You can also look here at the Apprentice Tutorials for help on shading, coloring, tools, etc. And you can also message me on my talk page, I'd be glad to help you. I hope that made sense..lol.. 13:37, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

plus its like the only free program with a working smudge tool You might want to try making her spots a little more splotchy. Spots on cats aren't usually perfectly circular like that. You might also want to try smudging them instead of blurring to give them a furry look. For the shading, look at kittypets that have already been done. I can make you a redline for the shading, if you like. (A redline is basically a guideline of where you put the shading. You dont have to follow it exactly.) <span style="">15:21 Tue Jan 27

I would like the redline, Giaria Thank you. Frecklewish is really difficult.. I choose her because I thought she was going to be easy... Hit me in the back... <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 23:10 January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups This any better? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 23:43 January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Please tell me the waste is clear!? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 23:46 January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Still can't see it, sorry. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:11, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Are you blurring EVERYTHING with the blur tool? For the shading I recommend only blurring at the edges instead, then you can see the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:13, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the all-caps..it always comes off wrong to users. And I can get you a redline either tonight or tomorrow morning. even if it's in addition to Gia's I'll still do it. It'll give you an idea of how it pretty much works. =) 01:11, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

http://oi62.tinypic.com/20i6s2a.jpg This is pretty much how I do my shading on my kittypets. The light source is to the top-right, and is clearly visible. This is a comparison of the redline, one blurred and the other not blurred. Can you see how it looks like the blank is almost 3D looking? That's what you ideally want shading to look like. The only thing I did to the original redline image was use the hue and saturation tool to change the color from red to black. The shading on the blurred version does have some issues, but it's just for demonstration purposes so it's okay. The apprentice tutorials are your best friend when you're starting out. On the topic of the image: Darken the earpink just a little bit and define it more. This is looking really great for your first image, keep it up! <span style="">01:18 Wed Jan 28

For blurring shading, use Gaussian Blur. Should be under Filters>Blur>Gaussian Blur on most art programs. <span style="">12:43 Wed Jan 28

Gaussian blur makes the shading appear off, like it's leaking almost, if you're not sure what you're doing or use too strong of a setting. Using the blur tool works just as well, honestly- it's what I use, when I don't smudge the shading.

Define the shading and darken it some - the image looks flat. 19:37, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I don't know if this is any better, but here it is :P <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! January 30, 2015 01:13 (UTC)

Much better! Now, define the light on the tail. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 01:16, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the ==> back leg shading a little more, and lighten the earpink. This looks much better! <span style="">02:25 Fri Jan 30

Think you could define the shading a tad? Also, you seem to know what you're doing, so I'm gonna go ahead and promote you to apprentice. 06:23, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's pretty defined already..but a tad won't hurt I guess. The shading also appears to be leaking on the < side of the face. It looks worlds better, nicely done!! 16:29, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for being dumb, but I don't understand by leaking 18:14, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Depending on how the shading is blurred, it sometimes creeps away from the lineart. Do you see on the tail on this dummy image, how it gets lighter as it gets near the lineart? That's what leaking is. This can usually be prevented by making thicker shading near the lineart and outside it (which goes into the waste area of the image), or changing how you blur/smudge it.

Just a question to see if you have a tool, what program are you using? <span style="">6:13 Sat Jan 31 2015

Paint.NET. Why ask Whiskey? 14:34, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Any chance you could make those spots a little smaller and less blurry, and a little less totally round and circular in shape? They look more fleck-like on the other image. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:26, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorry for the late update... SO MANY THINGS TO DO! Also, I'm sick... Oh and thanks for making me an Apprentice xD 18:01, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

There should be less flecks. Try using her medicine cat image as a reference for how you should do the spots. (reference = something you look off of to try to see how something looks) <span style="">21:48 Wed Feb 4

Also, dull down the earpink and lighten up the shading on the <== side. <span style="">01:50 Thu Feb 5

Define the shading on the front foreleg, please.-- 05:36, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the back a little, too. <span style="">12:33 Fri Feb 6

The shading looks like it's still leaking on this side <--- of the head, and the back of the tail on <--- this side looks like it's leaking too. 11:08, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

It's also leaking at the top of the back on this <== side. <span style="">15:10 Sat Feb 7

Define shading on the tail. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:45, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can someone tell me or link me how to do the flecked spots? There super hard xD 14:42, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Screech (Ki) - CBA
Schools back, hurray! I won't be as active as I was before but I'll still be around, don't worry about that! -- 05:29, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:32, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 05:45, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Could you darken the earpink a smidge? It looks a bit bright compared to the fur. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:29, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 22:09, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Redstar (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
He gets one, in Firestar's Quest, he was said to be a bracken colored cat during Leafstar's nine lives ceremony. Comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:16, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

He has a leader alt for this, and that one doesn't have stripes... so I'm pretty sure this one doesn't. The only reason he even has stripes to begin with is because of our "ginger cats get stripes rule". So, this and his alt leader would just be bracken colored, without the stripes.

 Told you burntclaw told you  ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:30, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Ha ha ha villianeous aren't I? =P Anyways, blur the shoulder shading more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:39, January 29, 2015 (UTC

I think lightening it up will do. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:40, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

I can hardly see the earpink. Maybe lighten it/the shading up? <span style="">12:42 Thu Jan 29

There is a tiny bit of shading leaking off behind (our) left shoulder, on the side. Nice! 13:39, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sure ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:39, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink at all. Mind changing the color or how your layers are?

Gahh you guys are commenting at me all at once XD ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:45, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some, and smudge the earpink a bit more. Nice work! =) 01:48, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is smudged more than enough, methinks. Although could you define the shading depth a little on the chest? 06:08, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Whew ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:48, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on (our) left shoulder, the part of the side behind that shoulder, and on his chest? Looking good! 16:59, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading just a tad.-- 02:03, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

re-upped ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:04, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the tail and belly shading a bit more, please? 23:45, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Methinks the belly shading is fine, but define the tail shading and smooth out the shading everywhere else. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:22, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

>:D Feel evil today ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:24, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading along the edge of the right cheek and the bottom of the chest. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:31, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lei si le I'm tired, off to study SSAT ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:53, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

Gah so dumb and tired at the moment I forgot the obvious- waste ._. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:58, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

There is still waste on the tail :P 18:56, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:10, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

He looks green.... I suggest you to tint the shading, like how it was done on the leader. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:00, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

May I have a second opinion on this? I think it doesn't look green, I really do not want to re do the shading. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:15, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Uh you don't have to redo the shading, just colorize it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:25, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Also, Burntclaw is right. You can just go into Hue and Saturation on the shading layer and tint it a good color. <span style="">12:43 Tue Feb 3

Um, that alt leader was one of the ones I tweaked and I can tell you it's not tinted. Shading tint is not mandatory and I think the image looks just fine as it is. It does not look green in the slightest.

Its leaking in a few places. Like the belly part where the tail stops and the part where the forpaws... uh... are shifted neatly? I dont know! xD Smoothen the tail shading maybe? Correct me if I am wrong. 18:07, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking in the crook of the front leg closest to us and in the bottom of the part of the tail closest to us (if that makes sense lmao) Brambleeshade, you're right, it's leaking where the tail meets the belly. <span style="">21:41 Wed Feb 4

Done ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:16, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's still leaking where the closest arm to us bends. <span style="">12:20 Thu Feb 5

Re-upped Whoops I forgot I even changed him. ._. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:30, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks like it's leaking..and there is a dot of hard-edged shading surrounding it. Are you using layers? If not I highly suggest them. Before I used layers, whenever I blurred next to the lineart I remember always getting leaking shading. Layers prevent that. Also, what program do you use? Just curious. 10:47, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I did use layers. And I use GIMP. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:29, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (K) ~ For Approval
*shoves*. 20:08, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten him up a little. He looks almost pitch-black. <span style="">00:06 Fri Jan 30

The base from the ancient image is #131313. Do with it as you please.

He is pitch black! I can't see his outline at all! Nor can I see his ear pink and nose colour. You really need to brighten him up. Not trying to be rude. I also believe there is waste on his side. correct me if I am wrong 18:11, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Seeing all the lineart isn't mandatory- just gonna make that clear now. As for your comment about his pelt, that's already been said, so please do not repeat comments, Brambleshade.

re-uploaded. okay.-- 21:01, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe brighten up the earpink a little? It looks pretty dark. <span style="">15:49 Sat Jan 31

Try to darken the shading a bit, or maybe lighten the coat color a smidge, or both? I know it's already been said, but I've got my laptop screen on the brightest setting it's got and I can't pick out the shading from the fur. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:33, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.-- 01:02, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see anything. Just a bitttt more. (I literally see the kit shape with blue eyes help it looks like a small fluff demon (absolutely adorable tho)) <span style="">19:20, 02/2/2015

Lighten up the earpink a little. this is like the cutest but i cant see him | <span style="">22:02 Mon Feb 2

Lighten up the shading. <span style="">12:43 Tue Feb 3

I don't think lightening up the shading is the best option - based on the pelt, she'll just be told to define/darken it. 15:46, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Agreeing with Sorrel^^ and honestly I can see him fine. He's a black cat, it's completely normal to not see him perfectly. 14:14, February 4, 2015 (UTC) Lighten fur color so we can see features better please! -- 01:46, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine, honestly. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:49, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hes pretty light for a black cat already, so i'd rather not lighten his pelt anymore than this.-- 05:25, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit. It might be just my IPad screen, though. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:44, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Leader) - For Approval
Silverbluestar:) 20:58, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Didn't Skye have this reserved???? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:04, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's not on the table. Darken the shading some? <span style="">00:06 Fri Jan 30

They did reserve its so far as I'm concerned... But if not, the shading is leaking on the legs. Also, define the shading everywhere. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:08, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, Skye reserved Magpie instead, so This image would be sziril's ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:10, January 30, 2015 (UTC) Lighten the Ear Pink some? Correct me if I am wrong <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! January 30, 2015 01:15 (UTC)

I did change my reservation to something else, so this image is hers. =)

Darken the earpink, I can hardly see it. <span style="">12:48 Fri Jan 30

I think the earpink is fine. Define the shading some more, I can't really see it. 13:25, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:23, January 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define light on her back leg on the left. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:08, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

The <== back leg looks like its leaking a little bit, but that might just be me seeing that. <span style="">15:51 Sat Jan 31

Can you blur/smudge the tail shading a bit? 23:43, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:28, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chin? Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:34, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Lightened it a tad,tell me if its still too dark 18:33, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

Add light to the back leg on the left. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:11, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:57, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make her less blue looking? This looks beautiful! =) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 11:55, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. I think she just tinted her shading blue. 14:12, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a bit cross-eyed.

Re-ups Yes,the blue tint makes her bluish 18:53, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the eyes a smidge 😃 -- 01:56, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine, honestly. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:39, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a touch? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:46, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt D) ~ For Approval
Ouch stony Mistyfoot. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:13, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink looks almost gray to me. Also, define the shading on the front leg closest to us. <span style="">12:33 Wed Feb 4

It also looks like there's some waste in front of the front leg away from us, but that might just be me. <span style="">12:34 Wed Feb 4

Re-upped <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:55, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

Soften shading -- 01:59, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I'd rather not smudge the shading more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:48, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading since it almost blends in with the body color. 02:23, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Nevermind;I was on mobile and the colors look different. 02:26, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the shading a bit more, and smooth it out some, I see what you were doing but it's looking a bit rugged. This is very pretty, you did a lovely job. And everyone says: "What the hell is Frosty doing up at 5 in the morning?" Lmao 10:54, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:33, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a little bit. Shouldn't need too much. <span style="">15:02 Sat Feb 7

Re-upped <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:11, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Greenflower (Q) - For Approval
So this lovely lady from the original series finally got a confirmed desciption. I'm really happy with how this turned out. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:46, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge the white a tad and define the shading? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:16, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged the white, defined the shading, and upped the saturation because it was bugging me. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:41, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the legs more? Shouldn't need too much. <span style="">12:32 Fri Feb 6

Maybe add some shading to the back and widen pupils a bit. -- 03:27, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice, so I think it's fine. However, define/add the earpink. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:09, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened leg shading, and a couple other places with shading, also lightened the earpink and made it pinker. I don't know whether shading on the back would work, since that's right where the light is hitting, and the pupils are small to show off the green eyes that give her her name. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:40, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

Well, I think in regards to the lightsource, perhaps the tail would be blocking a bit of light, so you could shade the back a bit right behind the tail. The eyes look fine to me, it is artists choice, unless of course they are all cross-eyed, which these are not. And the earpink looks fine now, at least to me. It's visible now, so I don't see a problem there. But I definitely recommend the tail-blocking-light-on-back idea. 11:04, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes are really pretty. I do agree with adding just a tiny bit of shading at the base of the tail, though. <span style="">15:00 Sat Feb 7

Reuploaded. Not sure I totally like how that shadow turned out. Any suggestions how to make it look better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:27, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Also sharpened the stripes and shading a touch. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:58, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the tail stripes a little bit. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:42, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (Ki) ~ For Approval
itty bitty kitty <span style="">21:47 Thu Feb 5

Define shading everywhere. Can't see any. Also, smoothen the stripes. 23:52, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, and Darken the stripes please. 23:54, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think thickening the stripes will do, tbh. Define the texture too. This is lovely :) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:15, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't any texture, just how the stripes are smudged. <span style="">00:38 Fri Feb 6

re-upped <span style="">00:43 Fri Feb 6

Regardless of the texture stuff, could you define it? Also, lighten up the shading. Remember, defining isn't always darkening, it's making it more visible. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:06, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Also, thicken the stripes a tad more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:08, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups how do i define the texture if there isn't any? like there literally isn't any texture on the image how do i define what does not exist (sorry if i'm rude it's 6:30 in the morning and i have a cold) <span style="">12:31 Fri Feb 6

I know it's not texture, but could you define the fur thingy (X.X)? While you're at it, can you shrink down her pale chest. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:34, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

boop a doop doop re-uploaded <span style="">12:46 Fri Feb 6

Smudge her pale chest fur into her darker fur some more. She's lookin' gorgeous ^.^ 10:57, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups i know she's so pretty <3 <span style="">14:58 Sat Feb 7

re-ups there was some waste on her nose from the chest <span style="">15:01 Sat Feb 7

Thin out the pale chest a little bit and define the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:42, February 8, 2015 (UTC)