Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 4

Spiderleg-Approved
User: Darkhallows I was bored, so I decided to do some art.

The coding was wrong. I fixed it. -- Malli nois Himatsu's Howl 23:12, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

The image is blotchy, there's no shading, and it has blotches of white. The brown belly needs blending into the pelt. The eye also looks wierd. -- Malli nois Himatsu's Howl 23:15, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

I worked with it, is it better? user: Darkhallows


 * The brown belly is perfect, but the ears look unatural almost white? Make them a different pink but blur them because how black cats' ears are. Look at a few pictures for reference.-- Shimmer Crystals 02:56, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I fixed the ear. I wanted to point out this is my first time with the art and I'd like to join or whatever.user: Darkhallows

I really like the belly. But the eyes look like he had too much coffee, and there's something about the ears... G B 57 05:50, 1 February 2009 (UTC)


 * He took my advice at looking at pictures of black cats. Good, but you didn't have to add the extra hair on the ears. You could just blend the pink in more and smudge black around it giving the fur over taking it affect.-- Shimmer Crystals 02:18, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

She. I didn't look at pictures, just my cat. (His name is Spider, oddly enough). But yeah should I blend it or not?


 * Oopsies XD sorry Darkhallows. She did! You'd be better off blending them in well.-- Shimmer Crystals 03:53, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the ear I also tried to redo the eye, but I don't like it... Darkhallows 01:33, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

I don't either. He looks like he has invisible hooks pulling his eyes back. G B 57 19:24, 22 February 2009 (UTC)


 * I couldn't agree more. I tried again. UGH I've never had problems with eyes before.--Darkhallows 09:08, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
 * By the way, is the ear to bright? Darkhallows 01:20, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

Yes...I'd say the ear is a little bright. I think you need to chose a darker pink (see some of the accepted black cat pixils for a colour idea) and blend it into the pelt a lot more thoroughly. --Sandy Leader's Den 19:57, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

Is it better now? Darkhallows 09:48, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

It is better than it was before. You could still go for a deeper pink if you wish though. This looks good --Sandy Leader's Den 08:08, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

The back and the face anre amazingly blended, but the belly doesn't look like it has been blended at all. Dawnfeather 23:28, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

I see what you two mean... I'm working on it now, hopefully it's updated by the time you read this. --Darkhallows 03:38, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

It's a lot better, but you could probably go for a little tiny bit more blending on the front though. Dawnfeather 02:39, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Done. Also blended a few other places, and fixed the lines on his chest.--Darkhallows 10:19, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Blended the whole body a little so it doesn't look so pixely. I also changed the eye to the one on the blank. Any comments? Please?--DarkHallows Lair 08:41, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

I think it is ready for approval Dawnfeather  08:45, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

I think this looks really good. You definitely need to get rid of the cyan background though - it should be transparent...--Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 17:15, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

It is transparent...--<font color="black" style="background:red">DarkHallows Lair 04:47, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

hmm...it's showing up as bright blue for me...must be my computer. sorry Darkhallows--<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 08:12, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

I'll check it out on my other computers ^^. Anything else you see that needs to be fixed?--<font color="black" style="background:red">DarkHallows Lair 01:03, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

No. I like this image Darkhallows.--<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 14:30, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

If you look closely, you'll see that you smeared out of the lines near the nose. If you could fix that, I'd be glad to approve this, Darkhallows :). <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 14:35, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! I fixed it. --<font color="black" style="background:red">DarkHallows Lair 03:48, 3 May 2009 (UTC)