Warriors Wiki talk:Books/Discussion Archive 26

Bluestar's Prophecy/Chapter 44 - Silver Nomination
Worked on it this morning and it's now done! comments? 17:15, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Looks good Duck! Just check for spelling as usual though. 01:41, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

I did and I didn't see any, correct me if I'm wrong, though. 02:53, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

I only noticed one in the second paragraph, second sentence. 03:27, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

fixed c: 03:54, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Some of the sentences seem sorta short and abrupt throughout the entire article. I'm not sure how to suggest fixing it, but maybe combining sentences and adding more descriptive words?

Also, as seen here, there should also be an important events section- which in this chapter would be Bluestar becoming leader, Redtail being deputy, Spottedleaf being the full-time medicine cat, ect. Also, if there are deaths mentioned, they should be listed too. I kept forgetting about this and this section is needed on all subpages- it was part of the original idea and I completely forgot about it.

done and Bluestar becoming leader wouldn't go in this chapter because she became leader before this chapter. 19:37, July 26, 2014 (UTC)

CBV? 04:34, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

The Sun Trail/Chapter 5 - Silver Nomination
I started working on this a while ago and forgot about it until recently. Comments? 01:58, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Check here, and follow the info that's given. If there are any important things regarding the chapter, it should be put here. One of those things for this chapter would probably be Jagged Peak's disappearance (linked with the chapter right before this, I think), and how it gets Gray Wing to leave the cave...and how he also finds him soon after leaving, along with anything you find important to the plot, characters, books, ect. Also births and deaths if there are any.

Done 17:17, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

CBV? 04:33, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Thunder Rising/Chapter 13 - Silver Nomination
I like these short chapters. Comments? 05:02, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

I don't see anything particularly wrong, just check for spelling as usual. 15:28, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

As I've been saying, look here and follow the formatting I used. If there's anything of any importance to the books, characters, plot, ect. Basically if you think it's important, go ahead and put it there, with births, deaths, ect.

done 19:31, July 26, 2014 (UTC)

CBV? 04:33, August 4, 2014 (UTC)