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Primrosepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
um idk whether to put this up now or what I'm just gonna leave it here and see how it goes 01:33, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! The shading looks kinda blotchy, there seems to be a cream spot on the farthest paw, and it also seems gray. Also, I'm having trouble seeing the eye color. 12:22, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine, honestly.

The eyes are fine, as is farthest paw is fine in terms of the cream, but the shading gets lost around the lineart. same with the main body. Wanna fix that Sheepy? 11:40 Fri May 10

Could you define/darken the shading on the tail, perhaps? The shading looks a bit lighter there. This is gorgeous! 15:54, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thanks i tried 03:03, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on a Pikepaw 08:22, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Anyone mind if I take over? 08:23 Mon May 13

Re-uploaded. 08:44 Mon May 13

I don't think she's mottled. On the StarClan version she isn't. 21:54, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Hawk, it's fine. It's probably the shading that's making her appear mottled. Bb un   legs  21:55, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

No, I think I see what Hawk means. I think blurring the shading just a bit more might fix any mottle-y appearance? How you shade is just so awesome! 22:34, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Does she not have any pupils, amico? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 23:25, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 06:05 Tue May 14

The shading looks a bit on the blotchy side 22:52, May 16, 2013 (UTC)

The white paws look cream. 23:32, May 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed the shading a little. 09:13 Fri May 17

It looks a little blotchy. Blur it? 21:25 Fri May 17 2013

Could you also tint the shading? 04:14, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tinted it a pinkish color. 04:26 Sun May 19

It still looks a bit blotchy, can you blur it a bit more? 01:24, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 07:07 Thu May 23

The earpink on this ---> side looks like it fell over in the ear  05:16, May 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:59 Tue May 28

Willowbreeze (Alt. Star) - CBA
- Meh. Comments? 00:22, May 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a wee bit? Nice. 11:25, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could blur the texture some, too? It looks almost like stripes. 17:20 Wed May 22 2013

Re-uploaded 03:04, May 23, 2013 (UTC)

CBA?

Sandstorm (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
She was mentioned as 'orange' as an apprentice in Fire and Ice. I know about the background, but I need help with iaza, because it keeps going pixally when I make images transparent. If someone knows how how to fix this, can you please tell me? 21:54, May 23, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the right hind leg and the right foreleg. Very pretty, Sorrel. 23:46, May 23, 2013 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad, please.

Reuploaded  14:50, May 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded hmm, thought about Beebs's suggestion, and I decided to add face stripes. 21:26, May 24, 2013 (UTC)

Just a personal suggestion, maybe darken the shading a bit to give it some depth 15:34, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste above her head, next to her tail and closest hind leg, and parts of her back. Remove it? Bb un   legs  19:10, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was removing that just now. 19:13, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

There's still a little bit above where her shoulder and head meets. Bb un   legs  19:15, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:19, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste all around the edges of the image. (You can find out where if you press the "Print Screen" button then pasting the image into Paint, then paint bucket the image in another color other than white. Try red) 20:56, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded done and done 21:48, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Shattered Ice (Alt R) ~ For Approval
He is described as silver in TST (not silver-gray, just silver). Anyways, comments? Bb un   legs  20:12, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading just a tad on his flank, the bit of shading nearest to the hindquarter? This is amazing 22:20, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on his right legs. Incredible job, Beebs. 22:22, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

I think the right legs are fine - they're not hit by the light at all, so they would be darker. I'll re-up with the darkened shading in a bit. Bb un   legs  22:24, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  22:28, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Mmm, while the legs should be darker, they shouldn't be that dark as it doesn't resemble the same pelt color. Also, the back legs, since there is no shading, look very flat being a stark contrast to the rest of the image. Also, please define the earpink. The fur texture looks awesome, looks neat, Bbun! 22:57, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Thank you, all c: Bb  un   legs  23:02, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back legs. They appear flat.

Queen Blanks ~ For Approval
Righty-o. Here we go with the queen blanks. Comment away my friends. ^w^ 09:42 Tue May 28

I'm no expert on this but maybe square up the shape of this --> forepaw and define where the du-claw'd be. I can't really explain how, the but maybe slope the haunch a bit more, it looks kinda flat compared to the shoulders. Gorgeous work, Berry! 22:15, May 28, 2013 (UTC)