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Swallowtail (RC) (E) - Redone
I have permision now, don't worry :). Original artist was Bramble, shading needed tweaking and stripes needed to match the warriors :D . Comments?  Elorisa   19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the smudges :3 20:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I personally like the smudges. The make him look furry, which is brilliant to me. I think you should just enlarge the ear-pink a bit. 20:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like the smudges too, Shellheart. They're just a little sharp. 21:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say leave 'em as they are. They look good to me :3 23:55 Sun Oct 23

Reuploaded~better?  Elorisa   02:02, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the reddish parts on her haunch and her leg? 17:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the ear-pink curve round more at the top. 08:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I didn't see any reddish parts...:/  Elorisa   20:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights looks blotchy. 22:52, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I redid it..again xD. The shading was wonky and icky, so I fixed it *throws confetti* comments? :3.  Elorisa   15:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a little green to me... Maybe darken her a little? 15:51, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink and blur the shading a tad -Guradian 01:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and darken the stripes to match her warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:35, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Elorisa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:54, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur her spots more. 20:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:58, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh how I love xcf. files >:3 22:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little too dark, or too yellow. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 00:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I took all the colors from her leader image.... 00:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure you took them from the right spots of the image though. The spots look a little green... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail needs highlights. 22:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are not mandatory. 04:00, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think what you meant to say, Dapplecloud, was that the tail needs an area where there isn't any shading. Am I correct? 06:13 Fri Oct 28

Reuploaded Eh... -- 20:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful. Make the earpink slightly more pink. 01:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her front legs. 12:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 14:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image needs to be lightened to match her other images. And I know highlights aren't mandatory USUALLY, but the other images all have highlights. Should this on have them too so they match? Unless you can match the 'shiny' look without highlights. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

And also move the three stripes up a bit to match the other images. 17:40, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink so that it matches her other images. 19:56, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Snowy? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 20:01, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Q) - Tweaked
Orginal artist was Hawkfire, shading and highlights needed tweaking. Comments? Elorisa  19:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The muzzle looks white because of the highlight, could you please fix that. And it looks like there's blurred lineart now. It wasn't listed for that I know, but I don't remember it being there before you tweaked it, so I think you should fix it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really odd and blotchy to me... I don't know. 15:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''tried blurring and tweaking the shading... :/  Elorisa   15:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred a lot. Try what you can, and if you have to, maybe you can redo it. 18:00, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks blurred still, and the muzzle still looks white. 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:39, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It looks blotchy. 01:40, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:32, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (W)~ Redone
OA was Nightshine and it needed to be brown and nobody likes triangle tabbies so heres this. 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot more, especially around the highlights (if you use them, of course) Guradian1098 01:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks pinkish-cream, not brown. 02:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

At least tint the base color to be more brown. 03:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ear farest from us. and her base coat looks gray, make the base coat match her elder. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't need to change it to match Oblivion's; she posted first, so Oblivion's should match hers. Lighten the shading a tad. 00:59 Sun Oct 30

As I suggested below, she should talk it over with Oblivion, and see what should be done. It shouldn't just be "Oh, she posted first" sort of thing. It's not fair to either artist. 23:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I've left Iceheart a message on her talk page. Now it's just a matter of waiting until she replies :3 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- sorry guys ive been crazy busy. 01:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She still needs to be more brown. This looks cream. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:31, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The changes werent showing... They are now. 08:58, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

No, I was looking at the right version. I still think it needs to be browner. It looks like cream still. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:03, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Redone
The next one on her lineup. Redone to match the MC. Comments? 00:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the artist before you? And maybe add some more stripes so it matches the medicine cat image .Blur the ear pink, too Guradian1098 01:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I don't know and tbh I don't care. I can't add anymore stripes because I don't know where to put them, but I will blur the ear pink. 01:17, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It took me a few seconds to look up the OA of this image. 02:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, I'm not you, and for your information, this project is concerned for the welfare of images and not for OAs. 02:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Icestorm, it's not that big of a deal and I thought we were supposed to say the OA anyway? Lighten the shading on her flank a tad. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Does it really matter who the OA is? Sometimes, it's hard to tell, 'cause most of these were moved from other file names. 02:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have shading on the flank. Do you mean the midriff? 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Flank = the area where your kidneys are. Judging by its location in a human, as well as Brackenfur's scar, I'd say it's where the shading is too dark. 02:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ohfail. I was thinking the My Little Pony flanks...where they have their cutie marks...yeahsorry XD 02:54, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink a bit. 19:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there's some smudged lineart on the tail; fix that. 06:09 Sun Oct 30

Re-Uploaded: Lightened shading on flank, blurred back shading, blurred earpink. Where is the smudged lineart? The lineart is perfectly fine. 14:29, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there waste all around the image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not. There is waste all around it. 16:49, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 10:14 Mon Oct 31

And blur the ear-pink too. 17:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Icey, you still working on this? 18:08, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. I'll be working on this, its just my internet is failing me. 146.115.179.113 23:45, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (E) - Redone
Eh, not too sure about this one... Should I change the stripes to match her warrior? I'm terrible at that tabby style, though ;_; 11:40, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I really love these stripes you did, though... Anyway, define the earpink a lot. 14:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This style of ear-pink looks good only on the leader charart, made it different. Leaf-storm,15:57,October 29,2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. 16:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like this style of ear pink. Less hassle. xD Blur the shading. 17:58, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like it too :P Blur the shading on the hindquarters, I love this image by the way! 18:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.' 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you change this so that it matches Iceheart's image? She was the first to post it, so it should match hers. 00:54 Sun Oct 30

I'm fine with changing the stripes, but I'm hesitant to change the colour. Personally - with absolutely no offence at all to Iceheart - I think the shade of brown in this image is more suitable. People have even been asking Iceheart to change her colour to make it more brown. I'm open to suggestions, though. 02:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, both images' color need to be changed. Iceheart's needs to be more brown, and I think this needs to be a little less pink/red. could you fix that? And honestly, though Icy's image is gorgeous, I like these stripes better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:13, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

No offense to Iceheart, but I like this style of stripes better. I think both of you should talk it out and see which one you like better. 17:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change this to match mine? Technically you shouldnt even be doing this but one exception to the rule isnt a huge deal. Still its my pattern well go with 00:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Must you really be so mean about it? She already said she would change it. 00:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oblivion, are you still working on this? 00:29 Fri Nov 4

I'm working on it, I was waiting for a reply from Iceheart. Now that I've got one, I'll start working on redoing the stripes. 01:48, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (CG) - Redone
OA was Hiddensun. It needed to be brown-gray and was on the redo list. Comments? 03:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, the stripes look hard-edged. Blur them, please. Beautiful image, by the way ^^ -Guradian04:06, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Didn't Dapplecloud reserve her elder version already?... 21:47, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, dang it, she did. I'll ask her if I can have it since I already put this up, but I'm fine if it gets declined. 22:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She's been busy lately, so she told me that you can have it. 22:00, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, any more comments? 22:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink smaller and redder? Nice work. :D 22:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:22, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure, but I think that her nose should be gray. Smudge the mud a tad on the flank - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:16, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:56, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ruby (KP) - Redone
I saw the shadings need blurring, I was thinking that I can only tweak but when I looked on it on my computer i saw that whole lineart is blurred. I take the base colour from it, other are new. OA is, I think MosspathOfSkyClan, Leaf-storm,13:25,November 2,2011 (UTC)

Was this on the list? And did you get permission to redo her? 19:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She also needs a black/dark grey nose. Sky- Gathering the army of  Trolls 22:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think Leaf's okay with this one. Blurred lineart is a pain in the butt to fix. xD 00:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I tryied fix it but i only made it worse, dark nose, yes here it is Leaf-storm,19:10,November 3,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 00:25 Fri Nov 4

How was is now? :-) Leaf-storm,13:15,November 4,2011 (UTC)

NEW reupload, I learned the layers in Gimp :-) Leaf-storm,20:51,November 4,2011 (UTC)

It's a lot darker than the other images, lighten it some. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:24, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,10:07,November 5,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it too. It's blotchy. 17:53, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lily (KP) - Redone
She needed to match the colours and markings of her sister. OA was Nightfall. Comments? 22:00, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading. 01:25 Thu Nov 3

Re-uploaded. 01:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 19:24, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur where you've smudged the brown. 22:44, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:52, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, particularly on the legs. 14:30, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:06, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the fore arm, the brown looks darker then the rest - 02:50, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:21, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine. She was listed to be redone since her chaart depicted her as brown, and she was supposed to be dark red. Her colors come from a darkened Foxleap (including earpink). Stripes were kept almost identical, except I added some extra thin stripes and altered a few. I have a feeling this image may be a tad dark, what do you think? Comments for improvement? 01:41, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah lighten it a tad. Otherwise: fantastic job <3 I am in awe of your skill. 01:44 Thu Nov 3

It looks a little... violet. I don't know if it's my screen or not, but maybe make it more red-brown? x3 01:47, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Who cares what color it looks? XD It's neat looking. Blur the ear pink. 01:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded And honestly, there is actually no such thing as a dark red cat, it's either brown or ginger. I tried my best to get it to a realistic color while keeping her a dark red color. Unless someone can show me a real dark red cat, then I'll borrow colors off that then =)  01:51, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say tweak the color balance and make it more like a very dark ginger. That, or take it very literally and make it look like my personal charart. ;) 01:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lol ignore my last comment. That totally soared over my head. 01:59, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Also, upon googling "dark red tabby" I got a bunch of cats that look like <- that. See it as you will, I think this is what they meant by it. 02:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah that's what I found, too. I adore this image, but to be accurate, maybe you should change it. 02:35 Thu Nov 3

Reuploaded How's this? 20:37, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

once again, reuploaded. She looked brown, and dog goneit I just realized the bg got colored :l  20:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Could you make the eyes a little more amber and a little less brown though? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:23, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes were copied exactly off of her approved warrior. I guess I can though. 21:25, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to put you to so much trouble, but she still looks kinda brown. Just a little bit more ginger and I'll be satisfied :3 22:33 Thu Nov 3

It's mainly the stripes that are brown I think. Don't just make the stripes a darker color than the base coat, make them a dark red color. Like on the image that shelly linked to. This is really gorgeous! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:49, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 15:54, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded e_e no more changing color...please have mercy! Just kiddin'  23:52, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D) - Redone
Ok, so first of all, he needed to match his warrior image, second of all, he needed to be dark brown not light brown (and I'll do all his images for that, don't worry) and third, he needed a mackerel striped tail. I tried to copy the tail stripes on a picture of one, but I don't know if it's very accurate. :P I also tried to copy Icestorm's stripes best I could, since he was described as having the same kind of tabby stripes as Brambleclaw and Tigerstar. Anyways, OA was Nightshine I believe. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:09, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a tad. He looks smexy<3 16:19, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Duh, Cloudskye. He is Hawksexy ;3 Could you blur the stripes at the base of the tail a little bit? They look a little too hard-edged. 20:03, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Bleh, he's overrated. Anyways, blur the stripes a tad. 20:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. I only blurred the stripes a little, cause Icey's style of stripes aren't very blurry, and I want it to match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:40, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail stripes a tad. <span style="">00:24 Fri Nov 4

Darken the shading under his tail as well. 21:14, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:31, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Poppydawn (E) - Redone
Original artist was Dawnfeather, and she needed to be dark red. I took her colors from the warrior image. ;3 21:18, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't Ivystripe supposed to do this? Oh well, I think it's okay for now. Anyways, there's some waste on one of the tufts on her back. 21:21, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

And on the back of the head, too. 21:22, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Edit conflicts. DX I was about to say the same thing. Ivy IS supposed to do this I believe. Well, if this stays up, make the eyes look a bit more amber and less brown. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:24, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I would have kind of liked to do this, but unless the other leads force you to remove it, I'll be ok with it staying up. The colors look a tad lighter darker than in mine, and make the earpink slightly bigger and curve with the ear. 21:27, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

You edit conflicter D:< Anyways, this is fine. What's done is done and this is outstanding - it matches yours perfectly, Ivystripe. Anyways, can you define the muzzle a tad? 21:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh you reuploaded your while I was doing this, so I took the colors from a previous version. That's why it's darker looking. But yeah, I was just told about this rule and it seems pretty pointless. I mean, as long as the person matches it pretty well they should be able to put it up, like Icy said. :P 21:34, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok, mine just looked brown to me and I couldn't stand it. I just put on a little more orange tint with the opactiy turned down. 21:35, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just my computer, but is there waste surrounding the image? 22:59, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nope I see waste, too. Erase it, please :3 Other than that, wonderful job. <span style="">23:31 Thu Nov 3

Reuploaded. I took into consideration some of her warrior's comments too, so it's a little more ginger than the warrior. :3 17:57, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make her muzzle a bit more gray; it looks kinda tawny. xP - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:14, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rain (TB) ~ Tweaked
OA was me. Luckily I still had the .xcf file, so all I had to do was add another layer with the mudstreaks on it :3 Comments? <span style="">23:09 Thu Nov 3

Naaaw, I wanted to do this one. I love this image. XD Oh well. Anyways, could you lighten the mud just a tad? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:46, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's not in the requirements, but can your brighten the ear-pink a tad? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:13, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink looks fine. I'd make the mudstreaks more like streaks than patches, but that's just me.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 23:54, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @Paleclaw: NEVARR haha I had to reserve it so somebody like you wouldn't steal it from me XD @Scarletwind: we changed the rules, remember? You can comment on anything that needs tweaking, whether the image was nominated for it or not. :3 <span style="">19:50 Sat Nov 5

Waspwhisker (KP) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sunspirit. Tweaked it to change the colour of the white and blurred/tweaked the shading a lot. Comments? <span style="">23:28 Thu Nov 3

Aww, cute. ^_^ There's a little patch that isn't shaded on the neck. If you didn't understand that, I'll try to explain again. :P 00:01, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded haha thanks <span style="">00:11 Fri Nov 4

He didn't have the scar as a kittypet. 00:13, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ...durh <span style="">00:17 Fri Nov 4

Make the white blurring on his face a little less extreme. 01:50, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

White blurring? I'm sorry that went right over my head XD explain? <span style="">19:36 Sat Nov 5

Splash (TB) ~ Tweaked
Needed mud. OA = Dawnfeather. BUT I think this needs a re-do to match the prey hunter image. I think I should do it. If you guys agree with me I will. But anyways, comments? 23:39, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, definitely one image needs to be redone to match. If you think this one is better and want to redo the preyhunter one to match this one, you can do that. Really, it depends on your point of view. I think the preyhunter needs to be redone as the mud is unrealistic and weird, but it doesn't really matter. <span style="">23:43 Thu Nov 3

Oh, and lighten the earpink a tad. <span style="">23:43 Thu Nov 3

That is very true about the mud, but I love to-bes. xD So I guess I'll re-do this one. Someone may tweak the mud on the preyhunter if they wish. I'll add it to the list. 23:45, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redone. Took pelt color form the prey hunter, along with the earpink and eyecolor. The stripes are a blend of the shaded stripes and the non shaded stripes, so I basically took the color off of the stripes too. Comments? 03:24, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud a bit more and brighten the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:12, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:23, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. This is beautiful <3 <span style="">21:53 Sat Nov 5

Enlarge the earpink a bit, then I shall steals. <3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 23:59, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Dark (TB) - Tweaked
My very first charart has returned <3 Anywho, we decided the To-be's got to have mud. So.. here he is. OA was me. Comments? 19:45, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the mud, it's kinda hard to see. 21:05, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 21:55, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud more brown. Right now it kinda looks pinky :P <span style="">23:09 Sat Nov 5

Gorsetail (NP)(W) - Redone
He needed to be redone as tawny, and the OA was Bracken- 21:38, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the ear-pink a tad and I think the ear furthest from us should be in shadow but I'm not positive. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:31, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt. L) ~ Tweaked
My first ever image! OA was me and it needed a torn ear. 21:44, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Tess (R)- Tweaked
Shading needed to be defined.. OA is Ashshadow. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 00:48, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 11:34, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blizzardstar (L) - Tweaked
Finally, a leader! Original artist was Echomist, and the shading needed to be blurred, but when I blurred it, I didn't like how it turned out, so I re-did the shading. 02:44, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

He looks kinda gray, lighten him and enlarge the chest highlight - 02:51, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the ear-pink as well. Extend the light onto bits of the upper forelegs and define the face highlight. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:29, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also add a white pixel to the eye. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:17, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:18, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks a bit a bit gray, can you lighten him again? 23:22, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

And brighten his earpink a tad. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:57, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (D) - Tweaked
Oh my.... well, he needed tufted ears. I based that off of Tawnyspot's charart. OA was Icestorm with major tweaks by Atelda. 04:06, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Breezepelt (W) - Redone
Blarg... Black cats are definitely not my specialty... Anyway, shading was blotchy and needed to be thickened, his pelt color needed to be darkened, and his ear-pink was a bit smudgy so I redid him. OA was Sandy. Took all the colors from Reedwhisker's warrior charart. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:28, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lessen the shading a bit, or make the highlights bigger. 04:57, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights tons and brighten them, and I agree, make them bigger - 16:20, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (R) ~ Redone
OA was Goldenpaw, needed to be gray-brown. Comments? 21:14, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

As lovely as this is, it needs to match Shellheart's version. <span style="">21:16 Sat Nov 5

Isn't Shelly supposed to do this? I just relized. 21:18, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, she is. I assumed she had already given you permission to do it, but if you ask her and she says yes, you can do it. <span style="">21:29 Sat Nov 5

Yes, you can do it if you want, but it'll be hard to match my stripes with the mud in the way... you sure you want to try? 21:59, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will try. 22:01, November 5, 2011 (UTC)