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Lilystar (L) - Tweaked
Ehm, hello? Its me agin, I tweaked Lilystar, blurred hightlinks and darkened shadings..hmm it looks a little like redoned shadings o_O Oh and Darkhallows is OA 18:40,November 28,2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and neck shading a lot, and possibly tone down the eyes. 20:41, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the end of the haunch and white pixels on the tail, paws, and on the left side of the cat. 00:23, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, reuploaded 10:11,November 29,2011 (UTC)

Erase the smudged lineart on the haunch. 02:04 Wed Nov 30

Its not smudged but i made somethig different, i think now it isnt looking like it 07:15,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Nah it still looks a little weird. And it is smudged, even though I know it wasn't you who smudged it. It's "part of the blank" but it's not supposed to be. Erase it and smudge the pelt into the earpink. 03:50 Thu Dec 1

Lighten the paw shading it's darker than the rest. 12:10 Thu Dec 1

Smudged lineart..huuf im blind my friends! :-) Reuploaded 09:26,December 2,2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine; redone to match her other images. 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the stripes a tad and blur them? 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 00:50, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and blur the shading on the belly. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh darn, I was kinda hoping to do this one. Oh well I've got plenty of images on my to-do list. XD Anyways, great job! Lighten and desaturate the whole image just a bit though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's this big patch of yellow waste near her tail, so erase that. xD 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and there's patches of yellow waste on her head, above our far front leg, and along her back. 02:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, they look brown like the pelt :3 02:58, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes lighter still. 03:31 Wed Nov 30

Re-Uploaded. 23:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the shading just a tad? ^^ 14:58, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make her less green? Maybe it's just my computer, but she looks tinted green. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:04, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Jingo (Lo) - Tweaked
I think that this should be redone, but it needed to be more brown as it was looking a bit greenish. Original artist is Darkhallows. D= 01:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink tad. 01:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the eye colour. I don't think it should be redone, but mainly because I like the stripes. ^-^ 01:46, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

The chin looks like it has some blurred lines. Also, the missing tail-tip looks like the lines are sort of thin, could you thicken it by about one pixil? I've always liked her, she looks like my Hickory only shorthaired :3 02:18, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It you want to redo it, why not? Just keep the same pattern, because I'm quite fond of it. xD 03:20, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. What Cloudy said ^^ 03:29 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded. o.o 02:07, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Move the unshaded part on her haunch down to cover part of her leg, as well as what it's covering now. 02:14 Fri Dec 2

Reuploaded. Heh....:{ 02:42, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

The legs look a bit dark, and it almost makes her look like a Siamese :P Lighten the shading on them a tad. 17:08, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (w) - Tweak
OA was Mistystar & the white needed to be smudged, but I couldnt get it to look like the patches so I smudged everything. - 03:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and darken the shading. 03:29 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded.- 03:36, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it a bit more? 03:37 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded - 03:43, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the original artist was Shadowedheart, then redone by Mistystar. Blur the earpink. 18:04, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And redden it a tad as well :P 21:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleberry (MC) - Tweak
OA was Echomist, her shading was very light and needed blurred. I just went ahead and redid the shading. The spots look almost kind of gray to me, but meh...didn't mess with them. It also had a minor transparency issue, colored lineart, and I added depth to the eye. I <3 Brambleberry so much, she's my favorite character! Comments for improvement? 04:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink, thicken the shading on the tail and forelegs; it also looks like her right foreleg has no shading but that just may be my terrible eyesight... I <3 Brambleberry too :) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ahead and just redid the earpink. I am her self-appointed biggest fangirl :P 04:27, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit. :3 Hey Shelly....  Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 22:41, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I see little rings around the dapples. Could you blur the dapples into the pelt? 01:43, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:49, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Goosefeather (MC) - Redone
I honestly don't know why this was even considered for a mere tweak. This image has been bugging me for a while. I am a lead, I can decide if an image needs tweaked or redone, so don't start anything. The speckles/spots looked very little like his elder image. Also, the image had shading issues. I noticed that in his description he has frazzled whiskers, ragged ears, and shaggy paws, so I felt those needed to be added as well. OA was Flamingomom3. One last thing, I felt the orangish-brownish herb adds a nice touch based on his character, so I refuse to make it green like the other's. Comments for improvement? 07:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pwetty! Mak ethe ear-pink a bit smaller and blur it. :3 12:16 Thu Dec 1

Well, since it says he needed shaggy paws, could you add some fur sticking out from his paws and not just his ankle joints? 12:33, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It did look kinda funky to me anyway  16:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno... it may just be me, but I think it'd fit better with a long-haired blank. I think the fuzzy feet look out of place on a short-haired blank. Just my opinion, of course. 17:56, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

That's kind of what I thought too, but I didn't want the elder to have to be redone too if we can help it, ya know? But I do agree  18:01, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It wouldn't be a difficult redo to tweak the elder image as well to be long haired... I'd do it for you, but I've already got two images up. I don't think there would be any objections. :\ 18:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, why not make it long haired? Shelly's got a good point, when it comes to the fuzzy feet. I think he's probably got shaggy fur in general, but we only know about the paws. xD 18:32, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Moony pointed that out to me on his talk page. I think it helps with his 'insane/crazy' look xD But, maybe make him long-haired, I could do his elder image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:15, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

If you don't wanna turn him into a longhair, I'd just suggest making the tufts a bit shorter. Define the shading on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:07, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made him longhaired  23:37, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Snowdrop (KP) - Redone
You wouldn't believe what program I used to make this. I have permission, original artist was Icecloud, and the shading needed to be thickened and blurred, and there was blurred lineart. Comments?

She should be lighter; right now she looks pale grey. 21:41, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just noticed I forgot to sign. I used Pixlr to make this. 21:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Still too grey. 22:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded If I lighten it any more, the shading would be too light, and I darkened the shading. 22:26, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink; its too desaturated. 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

If you won't lighten the image (I still think you should) then enlarge the shoulder and face "highlights". 02:11 Fri Dec 2

Reuploaded No obligation for the quotations, I won't annex the urge to be belligerent. 2:40am Fri Dec.2/11

Bumblestripe (W) - Tweaked
OA was Night shine, tweaked by Skystar. He needed to be longhaired, and oh my gosh, fail on those tail stripes ._. 01:13, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

No, I mean, look at the stripes I tweaked. Blargh. Anyway, the earpink looks like it sorta pixelated, anyway you can fix that? (I know its not on the list) Hey Shelly.... Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 01:35, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 01:43, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his foreheaad? Like is on his kit? If we went with it this way the stripe would be OVER his eyes, and that would just be WERID...... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the earpink xD 02:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-re-uploaded. FAIL. I missed your comment, sorry Maple xD 21:37, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Briarlight (Ki) ~ Tweak
Solid colored cats are boring. :P But Briarlight is one of my favorites, so I had to do her. ^-^ Anyways, I kind of tweaked it. The color had to be changed to match the other images and shading needed to be redone. Also, the earpink was a different color. So, I don't really know what to call it... 01:20, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

OA? And it's pretty! Blur the center of the left ear-pink it looks like a couple solid pixils. 01:25 Fri Dec 2

Earpink is fine. -- 01:42, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, yes.. OA= GroceryBag, later tweaked by Sandstar12, Bramble, and Moonpelt1786. 21:26, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Blizzardpelt, tweaked by Splashpelt, needed to be lightened, comments? 01:41, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a tad. ^-^ 02:25, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just here to say, I actually took it over and got it approved from Blizzardpelt :3 23:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Rockshade (W) ~Redone


Okay, before y'all lose your minds, Oblivion gave me premission to de ro him, becuase everytime i re-did him, he looked like barf, and if i lightend his color, THAT color would become his lineart color, and it annoyed me, so, i asked to re-do him, and, got this, i know he looks dark-gray, but this is version one of him, and if anyone wants to see version two, just comment, and i'll up load version two. Now then, Comments? (PLEASE ask for version two, i hate this one >.>) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, OA was TottalyTawnypelt, and was then taken over by Frostheart <3, and the highlights and shading was blotchy, and he needed a small, stupmy tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, i went with version number two, 'cause, i hated how the first one looked >.> I like this one, MUCH better....so.....please comment. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:36, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur that shading tons. Thicken it as well. 02:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, a comment! Reuploaded, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:52, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading on the back, make the highlight smaller, and smooth out the shading; it looks really streaky and botchy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:05, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mind lightening the whole image? It's hard to tell which from which. And spread out the shading, along with smoothing it as Scarlet said above me. 23:06, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Purdy (KP) - Redone
OA was Insane. The old colors didn't match and the pattern looked all smudgy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I don't think he would be all scraggly and torn like that when he was a kittypet, he probably got the tears and scars when he was a loner 05:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. His old charart had torn fur, so I'm going to leave that for now. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:27, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless, what Ivy said makes sense. I don't think he should have those patches either. 16:22, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Ki) - Redone
I hate doing kits. Have I ever mentioned how much I absolutely hate them? XD Anyways, needed to be redone to match his other images. OA was Minnowclaw, then tweaked by Icethroat21. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:45, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit. 19:55, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I took the stripe color directly from the warrior's .xcf file. I took all the colors from there (including shading colors) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:03, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur ---> This ears ear-pink. <span style="">23:35 Fri Dec 2

Snaketail (P3) (W) - Tweaked
It really is tweaked. Honest. XD Anyways, shading was extremely blotchy so I just pretty much redid it, I added gray flecks to his chin, and gave him a torn ear. OA was Bramble maybe? Not sure. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the gray flecks, at first, I thought it was waste. 22:37, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 22:40, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ye know what, he was described with grey flecks on his chin as an elder, and that seems like something that would come from age, so would he really need it on his warrior? And I'll blur the shading once I get another opinion on the grey flecks Sky. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:01, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably from old age, and since the description was given while he was an elder, it shouldn't be on his warrior image. xD 23:33, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make me wait, geez. xD The torn ear seems a. Bit pointy, can ya fix that? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 03:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (Lo) - Redone
BWAHAHAHAHA first image for a while. Color didn't match her leader image, shading/highlights needed to be redone. Blah blah blah. OA was Sandstar12. 20:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Snow, you need to darken your sig so people can read it... Anyway, the eyes on the leader have a ring of orange in them. 22:34, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. <span style="">23:31 Fri Dec 2

Blur the shading. 16:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflower (W) - Redone
I had permission to re-do her image... the stripes needed to match her queen image, and the OA was Bluestar1776. Comments? 01:52, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Rainy! Define the earpink a little. Make it more like her queen image. Also, blur the stripe that goes underneath her eye. 03:30, December 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll reupload it in a moment. But, before i do, what do you mean by 'make it more like her queen image'? Can you be more specific? 04:15, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wolfheart (W) ~ Redone
I could not tweak that image. Simple as that. OA was Ashshadow, and the shading needed to be redone, and it looked like there was something wrong with the highlights/whatever they are. 04:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading where the haunch starts. (If you know what I mean). Also, there is a light gray part on the front back leg, can you fix that? 16:20, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Just redid the shading. 16:55, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight a bit bigger and blur it. 17:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Cedarstar (L) - Redone
I got permission from Cloudskye to redo this; the shading was I don't even know, he needed to be darker, his belly looked pale grey instead of white, and there was blurred lineart. OA was Darkhallows. 17:00, December 3, 2011 (UTC)