Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Pearnose (MC) ~ Tweaked
oa be fallow, tweaked to be darker 01:08, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

define the pale parts, i cant see them anymore. HotTeacher69 (talk) 07:16, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

can you give me some ideas on how i can do so? darkening means they get obscured, unfortunately 20:26, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I'd suggest trying highlights, or moving the pale parts on a separate layer, lighten then smudge to blend it back into the fur. 21:39, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i am trying 00:16, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blue the pale parts? 20:17, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 14:46, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Rainfacestar and DJAngelCandy. Tweaked for flat shading and the scar 08:37, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you please lighten the shading? 11:24, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:00, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

sharpen the scar, it looks like a weird streak of pink paint. HotTeacher69 (talk) 18:26, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit.

Re-uploaded Best I could do about the scar. Any tips would be appreciated. 03:37, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Redone
OA is Bbun. If she wants it I'll drop this. Biased views these days suck. 12:18, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

"Biased views these days suck." Um, what? I fail to see how that comment has anything to do with the charart. Also, lighten the shading a bit and please crop the image so there's not so much dang waste on <-- side of the charart. It's a huge pet peeve of mine.

You also used the short haired blank 13:19, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lol where did the rule of all comments 100% related to art come from. 13:34, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. Also, why are you being hostile when I was just asking what the comment was for?? =/

Re-uploaded sorry 13:42, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Move the ear hair more inside of the ear. These images should show a little bit of the hood/back/whatever you want to call it of the ear, and it looks odd and out of place the way it is now...add some shading to it. 13:49 Thu Sep 10

Re-uploaded Is this what you meant? 13:56, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Are you actually lightening the shading like I've asked?? I don't see any difference in the file history at all.

His chest on the apprentice isn't smudged. 18:49, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

The light paws are leaking onto the tail. 20:20, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I did lighten it- and shit the file won;t open so i did my very best to fix things stupid macbook gimp 13:52, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Hrm, I'm not seeing a difference still... it could be Wikia not showing image changes again, hence why I asked. Could you upload to ezimba or another file uploader if you can access them?

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=1zxvequ&s=8 In the last few reuploads I lowered the shading opacity by at least about 10%, but now I don't have the file anymore, so i /tried/, but... 14:07, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

"Biased views these days suck" yea. I think I see a line inbetween his tail? Probably because of the short hair blank or smth if you know what I'm talking about

It looks like his paw markings were carried over from the warrior blank or something? They are partially inside the tail. 13:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Foxclaw (W) - Redone
OA is Honeyfur, with a redo (two of them) by Jenrock. Removed stripes as they were wrongfully added. Russet is red-brown, not a shade of ginger. In case it's not obvious, this is close to Pinestar's shade, due to this being my favorite color to shade. 8D

I'm seriously loving that colour too! XD can you define the shading around the belly? 22:43, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W) ~ Redone
OA's were Night Shine, Iceheart22, and Ivyheart. Redone to remove stripes. 15:17, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think he's a bit too red- try shifting the color to a bit more of a brown on the color wheel?

Reuploaded. 15:24, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you dull the earpink? 19:19, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also added the scar on his flank. 19:32, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the scar a little thinner? I think it's a little big, but ignore me if I'm wrong. 22:45, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:19, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (L) - Redone
OA was shelly. This was an interesting distraction from physics homework. 19:18, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the pale part a bit more? 20:22, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

I was an OA too, thanks. You're suppsed to list everyone. =\

Smudge the ear pink, define the light on the legs. 01:42, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 18:04, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest a lot to match the others please. and also is it just me, or do the stripes not really darken at all with the shading? They stay the same color throughout the shading... and maybe define the light on the legs and ...overall some more? 23:51, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

whoops, and add the pale part under the tail please 23:52, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

The pale chest on the others isnt smudged. At least, not on the apprentice which was approved before the others. The stripes are like...a shade lighter than black so I don't know what you're talking about. 23:55, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you at least smudge it some? And make the scar blend a bit more please 23:58, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

If it's not smudged on the apprentice, that is the image to match. She is not required to smudge it.

Re-uploaded: I am so sorry for the damage I did to a once beautiful image. 00:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Uhhh....now there's white on his legs? And can you lessen the pale on the tail please 00:45, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Not sure if the changes are showing. 00:47, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

If they are, I think you should smudge or blur the ear pink more. 03:32, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 14:39, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) ~ Tweaked
OA's were Ashshadow, Stoneclaw, and Stealthfire 00:37, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. 00:39, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

reups 00:44, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it more on the paws and midriff. Also, add shading to where I showed stealth last time. 00:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

ill reup later, but idk where that is -.- 01:01, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

It's the standard and default source for the warriors - aka the one I use the most. As it is now, it goes up way too high on the muzzle and should be on the neck.

Stormtail (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA and tweaker is Ducksplash. Tweaked to darken. 01:27, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink? 00:14, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink is the same colour of the warrior's, actually a little lighter I think and honestly, I do believe it's easy to see. idk if someone else agrees with you then I'll change it, but the warrior's ear pink will probably need changing if that happens. 05:51, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is Mount Everest. Tweaked for flat shading. 01:27, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a bit, please 03:32, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:27, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

The chest shading looks a bit odd... It doesn't flow well w/ the body. Could you maybe curve it a little so the chest doesn't look like a rectangle? 02:07, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 06:13, September 13, 2015 (UTC)