Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 9

Brokenstar (E) - Tweaked
I pray that none of you ever have to add torn ears to elders. Scarletwind was the original artist and I just added torn ears. 15:18, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Good job! I don't see anything wrong with this, really, but I'll wait for more comments before approving this. 15:24, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you thicken the lines on the ears so they're the same depth as the other lines? Unless they're supposed to be a little thinner. 21:02, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

I tried that, but it looked really... Just bad. ._. 00:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste where you edited the ears. 00:37, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make them look a little more natural? Sorry...but they seem...too pointy. *waits to be shot by Moonflight* 15:40, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it. Elder ears are mean to me anyway. xD 23:31, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploaded. 16:57, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The lineart of the ear in front is a bit hard to see; but just thcken it by about one pixel, and it should be done. ;D 16:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Improvement made. 19:23, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (W) ~ Tweaked
The original artist was SparrowWing. I just added/darkened shading. 03:33, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pink is to like....dark neon....Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:20, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, it looks kind of sloppy on the haunch. Good job. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:59, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:17, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Could you change the eye pixel? It's too much of a dark orange, make it brighter. 18:42, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the muzzle doesn't look blurred at all, so that could be fixed. Otherwise it looks good! 02:29, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, Rainy. Looks good otherwise! 05:39, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:36, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Triangularize the ear pink. If that's not a real word, then it is now. :) 23:28, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

The paws need to be blurred more and there are some ouh spots around the lineart. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 01:13, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is looking great- I really like the tabby stripes. The earpink is a little low, though, if you know what I mean. 00:13, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was actually me not sparrowwing anyways in the paws and on lineart near the tail the shading is kind of...sharpened so if you can you should try and blur it a little. Also near the chest fur it looks like there's an edge to it like the fur doesn't belong so if you can fix that..yea anyways nice job  --bracken-- ~19:05, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

it looks awesome but theres like a bit of a box of possibly left over shading...you think you can fix that? --bracken-- ~21:30, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

A box? Where..? 04:18, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think its that the shading looks box shaped? Maybe if you blurred it it would be better... 17:38, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think Bracken meant that there's a TON of waste around it. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:47, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try to round it out in a minute... but there can't be any waste around it. I re-did the backround, pasting a fresh blank over the old one, so I eliminated any waste. 00:05, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I won't be able to reupload this until I get back next week. 13:17, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I dont see any. Improvement made. 19:23, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (W) - Redone
If you can't tell, I got lazy. xD 17:25, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is nice, only things are that the stripe pattern doesn't match anymore. Make the tail more of a coral color and dull down her body color; it kinda looks too rich, but it is very nice. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 17:39, August 11, 2011 (UTC) sorry, wrong section. xP Define the ear-pink. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 17:40, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes at the end of the tail. I can't really see them because of the highlight. şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  15:04, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:40, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. 19:23, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (K) Tweaked


The orginal artist was Mistyheart, I just made her mottled, Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:55, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mottles. Their supposed to be dapples, but they're the same. :3 Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:51, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - Everything has been blurred to a max on Gimp. Wow, I read mottles Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:03, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. 19:23, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ratscar (W) ~ Tweaked
Meh, changes aren't showing, but the shading needed to be fixed and I believe the original artist was Icethroat. 02:14, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Second one down right  02:17, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Atelda! 02:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just darken the scar. It is very good ^^ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:24, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

It might just be me, but there's a lot of waste towards the top of it 03:00, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it for you, Atelda. Blur the chest shading a tad more, fix the waste on the ear, and darken the shading on the tail. 13:06, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Icestorm. The changes aren't showing, but o well, use the link up there^. 16:22, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I know there's been no comments, but I read his description and he has a torn ear. Changes aren't showing, keep in mind. :) 16:49, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there's some waste around the ears and the tail, could you erase that please? This is looking nice. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:19, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

On the one that I tried to revert, but inevitably failed? (Just checking) 00:27, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well in anycase, reuploaded. Changes aren't showing...still. 03:07, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. 19:23, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestar (L) ~ Tweaked
Changes aren't showing for me, but shading needed to be fixed and the original artist is Honeyfur. 00:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the shading a tad more. For the tail, make sure that the shading is either on the top or the bottom, it looks kinda odd with the shaded tail and the highlighted tail tip. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:31, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:06, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. 19:23, August 14, 2011 (UTC)