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Unknown Residents Blanks ~ For Approval
These were fun! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:48, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

I'll fix the other image on my next upload and thicken the lineart. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:52, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

On the shorthaired blank, perhaps just round off the tail tip? or make the fur tips on the tailtip pointier, it doesn't look quite right the way it is.

Maybe make the -> front paw a little more pronounced? Not exactly sure on how it would look but I think it should be sticking out a little more at that angle. I'm assuming that it looks the same on the shorthaired blank so fix it on both blanks. 03:37, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Am I the only one who just sees a gray box when it comes to the short-furred blank?

You're not, but i commented saying I'll fix it on my next upload. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:45, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

For the head, can you lengthen the bottom a bit and make more of a mouth, and then the chin? 07:51, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

It's actually the muzzle itself. I just had the cat look down, so the chin, I don't think, is there. It's the top of the muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:55, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart

I think the right (our right) front leg is thinner than the left one. Even them out? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:48, January 11, 2018 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I'll fix the thickened lineart later and add fur to the elbow. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:51, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

is it possible to maybe make the longhair tails a bit fluffier since theyre supposed to be longhaired after all 07:31, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe lengthen the extended paw?

What do you mean lengthen? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 17:44, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Make the leg longer; right now it kind of looks disproportionate. (but that could be just me)

Is the front leg on our right suppose to be bent or straight? I'm thinking bent. If so cats tend to stick their elbows up almost into their ribcage like this. So a cat crouching like that would have the elbow inside the lines that make the body. This would also help with how the leg looks a little shorter than the rest. 16:35 Tue Jan 16 2018 16:35, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make the back on the long-haired blank more fluffy? 21:06, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Crop the shorthair blank to the lineart (I think the longhair already is) Also there's a line on <- front leg near the head that I don't think is supposed to be there

The right (our right) front leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

I haven't forgotten about this! I shall tweak them on my next upload later! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:14, January 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:32, January 22, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the -> back leg on the short-haired blank more bent than the long-haired blank's? If that's the case, could you make the long-haired blank's leg more like the short-haired blank? 20:43, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

They're the same thing, it's just fluffy on the long-haired blank. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:03, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the line I commented about earlier is still there, so I'll circle it, as well as a few other lines. I can see that the lines are all in the whisker area, but they don't seem to connect anywhere on the head, which is why I think they're out of place, and they aren't on the shorthair, but they don't look like fluff. And finally, the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

the front of the hind leg also looks a little thin around the lineart, as does the all paws. 05:03, January 27, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo had said they were out of town, and experiencing some family issues. I don't think they've returned yet, but even if the Still Working goes by 24 hours, it shouldn't be declined, because it wouldn't be fair to Cosmo if she's not here to work on it. <span style="">02:29, 2/03/2018

Blanks are exempt from the one week/one month ruling. These won't be delcined, and Cosmo came to me and let me know about her activity. These will stay up.

I am home from out of town, but still family issues are going on and now my computer in sai isn't letting me save any files for some reason, even though I shut it down and stuff. I'm still trying to get back on and tweak these blanks, but I'm sorry for the inactivity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

It's all good, Cosmo. Thanks for updating us!

I should be uploading in the next day or two! Hopefully by saturday or tomorrow night. Sorry about not uploading in a while. Also, i got a new tablet for desktop, so that's good. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:44, February 9, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps thicken the lines on the ears and back a little bit? It might just be my eyes, but it seems a bit thin. <span style="">18:03 Sun Feb 11

Re-uploaded. WOO! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:42, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the lines around -> whiskers/leg look kind of messy on the shorthair, and a little messy on <- whiskers/fluff on longhair. The longhair's tail is at a different angle than the shorthair's, and my only other concern is that the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

Could you make the ears just a little more pointed? 20:58, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

idiot me above said the wrong leg: right (our right) back leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

The left front leg looks too thin. Even with the angle difference, the front legs should still carry the same weight, if that makes sense. I can give a red line if it would make what I mean clearer. <span style="">12:40 Thu Mar 1

maybe make the fluffy bits on the side of the face of the longhaired a bit smaller, like right now they seem a lil big if u know what I mean? not reducing it, though. 18:42, March 1, 2018 (UTC)

Are you still working Cosmo? Not going to decline this, just checking on ya.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:57, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, I am. Things been shitty lately. But they should be uploaded again soon... <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:41, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:49, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

I'm gonna change the hind leg again! :u Any redlines will help too. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:45, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

I think you should make the line on the <= ear disconnect from the outline, so it doesn't look too thin, if you know what I mean. Just a bit similar to the other ear. And maybe alter the middle tuft on the long-haired tailtip a little? It could be just me, but it looks almost like another paw. I love this blank so much ughhh ><!!

These are turning out very nice! Maybe make the lineart on bottoms of the left front paw and back paws a tiny bit thicker? 22:31, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

anything happening w these? 22:09, April 12, 2018 (UTC)

Heck if I know

Softpaw (VS) (Ki) ~ CBA
hey. im back. she's a little plain but im happy --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Pretty! Darken the shading and add some on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 06:57, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a little. Cute! <span style="">07:00, 3/21/2018

Aaaaaaand re-uploaded! --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Smooth out the shading and define it on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 07:54, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That took me about 5 minutes of really intense blurring but I think I did it???

haha oops forgot my signature --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Could you perhaps define the light on the top half of the tail? Also, with the light source that it seems like you're aiming for, I'm not sure there should be any shading crossing all the way across the front legs; it'd just shade the legs on the > side if you know what I mean

Maybe smooth out the shading around the chest a little? 14:33, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, maybe a bit in <-- ear too? 22:26, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Patch, I don't have any shading for the <- ear because of my light source. Do you mean the -> ear? --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

I've seen shading in the ear with this source before, I do it sometimes with my images too, but it's not needed. Up to you if you want to add it. Define the shading depth on both the legs and back paw. 13:08, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart. <span style="">16:36, 3/22/2018

Expand the shading on the tail and define it on the legs more? c: <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'll get rid of all the excess shading on the -> paw next upload, okay? --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Add some light on the > front leg, and maybe make the tail shading stretch further down to the base, if you know what I mean

Re-uploaded. No I'm fairly sure I didn't know what you meant but I tried. --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Could you smooth out the shading on the body and tail a bit more? 21:38, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you remove the shading along the front leg? With the way the light hits, that side shouldn't be shaded.

Still working? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:24, March 30, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yeet --

Can you define the shading on the legs and tail, and maybe darken it a little more on the > front leg?

Define the shading depth a little too, particularly on the head and chest. 00:37, April 2, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

Define the shading depth just a little on right front leg. 00:18, April 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

Could you define the light on the top half of the tail on the < side, and maybe darken it a smidge there and on the > front leg?

I don't know if it's just me, but the apprentice version looks a bit lighter? It may just be me, though. 03:32, 4/02/2018 ​

Re-uploaded. I think it's fine, Comet. I gave the file to Spooky myself, and the kit was actually posted first. So yeah, it's alright. Also, Spooks, what do you mean by "define the light"? --

I meant make the light more visible on the top half of the tail, as the top tip/half looks like it's in shading all the way across, when really < side shouldn't have shading with this source. Light goes >> way and shading goes on >> side if you know what I mean

i tried --

New cite says this should be dark gray. Also define the shading on the tail. 00:50, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

^And pale paws. 23:27, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

i've deluded myself enough to believe that this design doesn't exist + i tried

Could you darken th shading slightly? Since the base got darker etc. also for the paws, the pale shouldn’t go quite as far up, and maybe try to use a very small brush to smudge it so it matches the apprentice

i hate this --

I think her back paw needs to be pale too. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:36, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

heck --

CBA? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:05, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Ivypool (Q) ~ For Approval
00:57, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Very nice! You need the sliced ears. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:58, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Her eye color doesn't seem to match the others, also define eye depth.

Reuploaded Thanks, Cosmo! Also, I put an overlay layer on my eye color so I deleted that. Is this better? And just realized I did the wrong siggie oops. 1:10, 4/10/2018 ​

she's missing the silver on her front leg. 01:24, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a bit smoother on the other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:03, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:46, 4/10/2018 ​

Could you blur the stripes a little bit more and smooth out the shading? 22:36, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:42, 4/10/2018

I feel like the silver on the front leg should be larger, in comparison to the kit and warrior images. 18:17, April 11, 2018 (UTC)​

Reuploaded Btw the patch is lighter on the right side because of highlights. I could lighten them if you guys want. 1:47, 4/12/2018

I'm just curious, why are her eyes no longer dark blue despite her page saying so? Anyway, would you mind darkening the tint of the shading by a bit? The blue seems a bit bright. This looks great, btw!!

Reuploaded 00:01, 4/15/2018 ​

CBA? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:39, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to interrupt CBA, but there's leaking shading near the <-- hind leg on the stomach, and near the --> front leg. <span style="">05:29, 4/15/2018

Reuploaded 13:14, 4/15/2018

It might be my screen, but it looks like there's a little splotch of white where shading should be on the belly. 13:18, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:24, 4/15/2018

There's leaking shading on the head <span style="">18:06, 4/15/2018

Define the shading on the legs a tad and the tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:06, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Finleap (W) ~ For Approval
All colors from the other images. Comments? 19:34, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the light on his little stub of a tail? I was hoping you'd be able to repost this. 8D  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">19:39, 4/13/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

Reuploaded. Thanks. 19:50, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 23:43, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:53, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

can you soften the pale parts a little 01:10, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add some shading to the head some? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:40, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo there is shading on the head. Do you mean the forehead between the ears or...? <span style="">10:30, 4/15/2018

Between the ears, I guess... <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 13:23, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:31, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Velvet (VS) (Lo) ~ For Approval
hi uploading from my phone so won’t be able to reup until Monday but dumping this here

Define the shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:49, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

Flipkit (K) ~ For Approval
Hi everyone this is my baby kitty Gus Gus Flipkit. 21:42, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading a tad?

Reups 00:24, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:04, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Spotkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Kit blanks will be the end of me ;-;

Define the shading on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:50, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the head 00:12, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-ups

Probably gonna get shot for this, but could you define the ear pink just a little bit? I'm having some issues making it out from the pelt color. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">14:37, 4/15/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

Re-ups Nobody shoots Jayce

I think the shading on the back paw should be on the other side, since the legs and tail depict the light coming from <--- that side 22:50, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Thriftkit (K) - For Approval
i might change the eye color. 23:04, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

Cute! Define shading?

Re-uploaded. 23:19, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

I don't know if it's my screen, but would you be able to make her a tiny bit darker? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:37, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:42, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

This looks a little purple-tinted. <span style="">10:32, 4/15/2018

As long as it's not super obviously purple, I'd say it's fine, but if someone could give me a second opinion, that'd be great. 13:15, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Looks dark gray to me. Cinderheart's images are tinted as well, I do believe. I think in this case, it's fine. (fun fact: Cloudstar's leader image is tinted purple =O)

Danng this is THE cutest thing I've ever seen omg :O It might be my eyes or my screen, but the ear pinks on each ear looks like two different shades? The => ear seems to be more saturated pink.

Re-uploaded. <3 23:32, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the ear pink? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:03, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Shellpaw (Kit alt) ~ For Approval
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Maybe smooth out the white around the face and head? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:46, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

I thought unless tortoiseshells are described with white it can't be added? <span style="">04:49, 4/15/2018

its not white, it's cream, which should be acceptable i think?

Oh yeah, that's true.^^ <span style="">05:26, 4/15/2018

Re-uploaded I'm not sure though, bc I remember someone was told to remove cream on a tortie cat (could be my false memory though). I'll see what others have to say about this

Cream isn't white and can be part of a tortie's coloring. It's fine and can stay.

Plumpaw (TC) (App) ~ For Approval
<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:46, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Might just be my screen.. but this looks a little more brown-and-ginger than black-and-ginger. <span style="">10:31, 4/15/2018

I got the colors from the kit and it's probably the shDing too.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 12:13, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

On my screen he looks black and orange

She looks black-and-ginger to me. It's probably just shading, or different color calibrations between screens. Not sure you'd really need to change the color at all, honestly.

Mistcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
and in the beginning the universe said "let there be carpal tunnel". 19:01, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

..now that.... is fluffy. Smooth the shading in --> ear? There's some hard-edged pixels I'm seeing. <span style="">19:03, 4/15/2018

reuploaded 20:29, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe add some more spikes to <-- side of the head and maybe some on --> shoulder? I love these spikes man, lol. Maybe define the shading on the tail, too?

define shading on the back --

Bristlekit (TC) (K) - For Approval
Kit shading is hard ;)  ErmineGlow (talk) 19:54, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Cute! Define shading? Looks like part of it's kind of shadowy.

Reups Thank you! Also, I have uploaded this under the wrong name, so if someone could rename it to the correct one, I'd like that. ErmineGlow (talk) 20:05, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light source, I can't tell which direction it's coming from. 23:50, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the ear pink? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:04, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

define eye depth and nose pink? --

Tree (MCA) ~ For Approval
hi okay imma make like a tree and leaf< /shot> <01:30, 4/16/2018> ​

I think Bluestar said his ears were darker too. Add some shading underneath his chin starting to the chest? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:39, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

re-up I dunno, Bluestar posted the hex codes here and I'm pretty sure I got them all correct. Second opinion? <01:48, 4/16/2018> ​

He does have darker ears, as well as an M shape on the forehead, and more tail stripes (10, including tail-tip). 02:00, April 16, 2018 (UTC)