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White striped rogue (Ro) ~ For Approval
Alright, assuming I found the right cat, I think I did this pattern right, though the pattern changes with each square, so... corrections would be greatly appreciated. Also, the file name is Rogue One :P

could you smooth out the shading on the back-back leg? (idk if that makes sense) 09:22, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light at the base of the tail a bit more? 18:39, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading on the neck a little? 20:35 Sat Mar 23

Reuploaded I just saw the two latest comments now so I'll fix it next time 20:41, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, don't believe there'd be any shading on the back; it'd be expanded on the belly and upwards to form the haunch and back of the shoulder. There'd also be a touch on the base of the chest; and a bit more light on the topside of the < side of the tail

Can you smooth out the shading in the belly area a bit? 23:43, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading maybe this works now 00:00, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and ears. 19:53, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

And the face too!^^ 22:08, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:21, March 26, 2019 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the shading leaking on the belly?

Yep. Also, define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 21:57, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

The shading below the back of the head around the shoulder area looks a little too dark compared to the rest of it. 14:39, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:46, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Tortie and white rogue ~ for approval
ew how did i regress so much in one day sksks 12:53, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Would you be able to define the shading any? The pattern placement here is making seeing the shading extremely difficult.

Stone Song (PoT) (L) - For Approval
Don't know about these stripes. I know they don't match as well, don't comment on that I'm going to fix it. 00:18 Mon Mar 25

Could you expand that left earpink down? It looks odd and it seems lije it cuts off half way 11:47, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more? 22:11, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:18 Thu Mar 28

Unknown residence blanks - for approval
Bam. thanks so much guys i appreciate it :3 13:55, 3/25/2019

can you shrink the blanks? they look awfully big compared to the rest. 15:08, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ears need to be smaller (height-wise) and possibly rounder. 16:47, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

I like these Winter, but can you shorten the noses a bit? By two pixels? 22:09, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can't pretend to be any expert in cat anatomy, but should the tail but arched over the back for balance? 23:11, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

The nose looks fine imo Malina457 (talk) 15:59, March 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

The tail on the shorthair should taper out towards the tip. Also, there's a stray pixel to the right of the shorthair's chin  16:02, March 26, 2019 (UTC)

Is it possible to remove the third and fourth line on the front leg farthest from us? Right now, it looks the like the cats have six toes. I suck at anatomy so you don't nescessarily have to do it. :) 23:35, March 26, 2019 (UTC)

Thats the dew claw though? Also yeah the noses are fine. If i shorten them itll look weird. Also no the tail was like that in the ref i used. Im caught on mobile rn and will work on fixing the issues tomorrow 00:08, 3/27/2019

Paw looks fine too Malina457 (talk) 00:26, March 27, 2019 (UTC)malina

i think the issue that potato was talking about regarding the nose is that the entire face is exaggerated to be slightly wider as a part of a style. im not sure if blanks are allowed to be stylized this way, but if it is necessary for it to be anatomically correct i believe that [https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1518791841217-8f162f1e1131?ixlib=rb-1.2.1&ixid=eyJhcHBfaWQiOjEyMDd9&w=1000&q=80 the muzzle should be rounded (and shortened), as well as the nose. i also think that the eyes should be shrunken as they shouldnt take up such a huge proportion of the face]. 00:50, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC Alt. 4) - CBA
not positive if this warrants an alt or not, but this is for the art in Ravenpaw's Path where she has stripes around her eyes. All colors came from the colored manga page 00:39, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Crop the image, as it's being cut off on her right side a bit. Lovely Scarlet. 02:09, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

I think you mean give it more space. Cropping would be cutting the image off lol  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:29, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Also coukd you darken that body shading just a tad  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:30, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:34, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading on the tail and <--- front limb? 16:32, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:37, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:40, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Stonefur (Alt Deputy) - CBA
ah yes, a blank redo from many ages ago that only NOW becomes warranted again. ​

is this an older version of the blank? 05:08 Wed Mar 27

Is it? I'm having issues downloading the newer one, let me go fiddle with a few things... it's very possible this is an old version.

Re-uploaded. Yup, that's an old version. Gotta love PS errors.

Can you smooth out the shoulder shading?

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 14:40, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Tabby warrior ~ CBA
i mean i picked a random tabby tbh. also revived rosetail

She looks cross-eyed, can you also define the main body shading? 13:06, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded can't define it much more than this

Stunning! Could you define the earpink, I can't tell it out from the pale parts color you have.  Ellie  life is an illusion 13:51, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, but the earpink is brighter than my usual standards and I can see it clearly. May I ask for a second opinion?

I think the ear pink is fine. 16:35, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed with Finches. 21:58, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:41, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

tabby warrior- CBA
my baby 09:30, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 13:07, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

dark kid 14:53, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:41, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

silver tabby warrior (warrior) ~ for approval
meh -- 10:34, 3/27/2019

I believe the stripes need to be black since she's a silver tabby. Could you make the stripes less paintbrushy and perhaps add more variation?

hm it's black ^^ i'd do the other thing you mentioned though. -- 11:14, 3/27/2019

reups how about now? -- 11:22, 3/27/2019

could you possibly thicken the stripes on the tail or add some more so its not so spacious?  Ellie  life is an illusion 13:50, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add/define the shading in the -> ear? 15:21, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

You forgot to add the back paw farthest from us' color 19:17, 3/27/2019

Can you smooth out the shading on the chest just a little? 23:19, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

reups i didnt know it was a backpaw lol -- 06:46, 3/28/2019

Pale she-cat (ToEH) ~ For Approval
so I used an OC for this; lowkey made her an albino cat. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:18, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and arm? 15:22, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if this is the tint or not.. but she barely looks white on my screen. Maybe try changing the shading tint or lighten the texture. This is your preference, so you don't have to do it. Expanding on to Patch's comment, the shading needs to be smoothed everywhere actually. 22:00, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

The character's described as "pale", meaning that the colour won't necessarily be white but just a lighter colour (so pale grey works fine). 22:57 Wed Mar 27 2019

The shading looks smooth everywhere but the haunch and arm, so could I get a second coz if I smooth those already smoothed parts more I'll have tod efine the depth and that'll just be repeating the process. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:00, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

yeah i agree with mink that the shading is fine except for on the haunch 00:07, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

I actually agree with Potato that it could use some smoothing out pretty much everywhere. The face and haunch especially.

Snowdrop (KP) - For Approval
01:42, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Are the lines/stripes a texture or fur pattern? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  18:56, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the texture a little bit because it's making the image look slightly gray (at least on my screen), and Snowdrop was described as pure white. 20:02, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

That is texture. Can you also define the eye depth a tad more? If not, it's totally fine. ;) 21:51, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Dark brown Riverclan Warrior ~ For Approval
Meh, it's okay...I hope I named this right -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  02:44, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. 04:24, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

define light on the end of the tail more? -- 06:30, 3/28/2019

Define the light on the ears and smooth out the shading. 13:02, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! I also changed the eyes and texture a bit ^^ -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  18:55, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make sure all the texture is flowing in the direction of the body. Also, would you mind changing the base of this, as it looks green (on my computer screen yes). < this ear has some grayish pixels in it and lastly, is the nose filled in? I can't tell. What a handsome cat. 21:54, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

OS-1.warrior-8 ~ For Approval
15:41, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Pad (ki)-for evalulation
did i name this rightWillowstep12 (talk) 15:43, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

am i allowed to do this?Willowstep12 (talk) 15:45, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

I'm honestly not sure given that this is a blank redo. As one of Broken's images, would this count as an original technically?

...sorry i did not knowWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Were...were kits even decided to be done yet? I don't recall a verdict being reached. 19:45, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Tortoiseshell SC Warrior 1 (OS-1) - For Approval
I have no clue if I named this properly. Its the first tortie ShadowClan warrior from Into the Wild. <span style="">21:59 Thu Mar 28