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Runningnose(MC) ~ Redone


Was told to redo. Ew...Comments?... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons, and make the ear pink bigger. 02:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, the patches... Try looking at Spiderstar for what patches ought to look like on short-furred cats. And could you go back to the old pattern? I'd rather not have to redo the MCA unless absolutely necessary. 02:29, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, define the shading so it actually shows up on the white, please. 02:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please go back to the old pattern. Redoing doesn't necessarily mean changing the pattern. There's no reason to redo his other images. Anyways, darken the gray to match and darken the shading all together. 18:30, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, me and another SM chat (not gonna mention names unless she tells me to) think this should be auto-declined, as it's not 80% complete. 20:25, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

It's at least over 50%. Maple, you have a week from the upload date (2:08 AM Wikitime on the 23rd) to get this over 80% before it's declined. 21:45, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maple, are you working on this or not? 04:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

No i'm not, 'cause of the car wreck, im spending so much time in and out of hosspitals, and only have one arm...i cant work on this, 'yall, i'm sorry. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 01:07, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

If this is up for grabs for people to take over, I will. 05:50, 27, 02, 2012

Sorry to hear about that, Maple. Okay, DJ, you go ahead and take over. 12:46, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

DJ, are you going to work on this? 17:46, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Redone
I've always wanted to put this up. Original artist was Sparrowsong, with Bramble taking over, then Icestorm/Appledash redoing it, then redone by Frostheart which was declined, and then Rainfacestar took over, but she withdrew it. His stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 18:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ooooh, Lovely! ^^ Just blur and center the earpink and fix the paws and it'll be perfect. :) 18:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also define the shading a little? This is phenominal, great job! 19:07, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad (along with that Ivy said). This is amazing... I love it. Job well done. =) 19:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ... :')! 21:12, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry - and this is a beautiful image - but since I nominated him, don't I have claim to his images? I had an idea of what I wanted to do for his warrior, but I wasn't sure if we were going to redo him completely, so I held off until I was sure. This probably sounds really selfish of me, but could I please take over this image? You could do his apprentice or kit if you wanted to. 21:53, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think that rule has been integrated yet. 22:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

While it may not be a "rule", it's still common courtesy; since it was my idea, I thought I would get claim to it. You don't have to give it to me, but it would be much appreciated. 22:56, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'd rather keep this, since I really like it. You could do one of his other images. 23:19, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more 02:28, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and define the shading. 02:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:38, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He looks really green; make him more brown. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 03:24, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't look green to me o3o Define the haunch shading and enlarge the earpink. Sky Promises, promises 12:09, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty, Leaf! Define the scar and the light on the tail a bit more, please! 01:20, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Once you enlargen it, define the earpink. (Unless, y'know, it matches with the other images). 09:59, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think it has to match the other images, those are going to be redone anyways. 18:25, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Sky Promises, promises  13:29, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading without blurring the stripes, I'm working on only one layer. 02:17, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Redone
First elder for me. ._. 03:06, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 03:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad and make it more triangular. c: If ya use highlights, tone them down a tad, otherwise just blur the shading like Cloudy said. *Is stupid Dx* Sky Promises, promises  06:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Maple? 20:44, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (W) ~ Tweaked
Blurred the highlights, fixed blurred lineart, and eye wasn't in depth. OA was Ashshadow with a tweak from Atelda, I think. (This is my first tweak so please tell me if I'm doing this right.) 19:12, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around. 01:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:59, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Also, I fixed the heading for you. 02:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't match his description at the moment. It says he's a dark grey tom, and now he looks like a light grey one. :3 When I nominated it, I was told to redo the colour too. 02:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (W) - Redone
Modified triangle tabby or something. x.x OA = Ashshadow with a tweak by Sweetflower. Sky Promises, promises 03:33, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Amazing, Sky dear! :3 Define the tail shading? 05:21, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tail shading on short hairs. >:U Sky Promises, promises 05:30, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. Also, agreed on the tail shading. 'tis a pain in the "add", if you catch my point. ;) 05:56, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ha. Add. Sky Promises, promises 06:34, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, it's blindingly bright pink. I love this <3. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 14:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (Ki) - Redone
To match other images. 05:53 Sun Feb 26

OA was Icethroat (derp) 05:54 Sun Feb 26

Define the earpink a tad. <3 -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:09, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:13 Wed Feb 29

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Redone
I don't know if changes are showing, he needed to bbe redone to match apperntice image. OA = Bramble. 22:17, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. 02:05, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) - Tweaked
I personally think it needed to be tweaked more for the shading, but the stripe needed to be defined. OA is Evanphoto, with a tweak by Appledash. 05:54, 27, 02, 2012

Can you blur the shading a bit on his chest? 09:53, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I was going to get this... I nominated him. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:04, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the part of the stripe thats on his tail. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's some blank pixels in his torn ear. 23:25, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I don't like the shading on this, and transperant pixels are annoying. =P 09:36, 28, 02, 2012

I don't suppose there's any way to blur the shading on the front? It looks like a continuation of his stripe. •_• Sky Promises, promises  09:39, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripe on his tail more. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle thingy. <333 20:59, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Crowfeather (K) ~ Redone
Who's a cute little kit? Crowfeather is! Shading needed to be redone and the highlights were too think, so it was said to be a redo. OAs were QuailflightTheCat, Sandstar12, and Iceheart22. Tried a different shading style; will fix if recommended. 21:39, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose black/gray. ^^ Cute~ 21:41, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Cute little grumpy WindClan cat 83 Enlarge and define the earpink, and possibly put his eye colour over top of the shading if it isn't, so it don't get lost in the shading. Sky Promises, promises 23:20, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

No offense, but the shading looks rather flat. 23:23, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:59, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 20:03, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading; it looks very flat. Sunny frost  21:53, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Alt. Ki) - Redone
The changes may or may not be showing. OA Was Goldenpaw, and, it was a triangle tabby. Comment-o's? :P 23:18, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:36, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Wasn't he described as a she-cat at this point and time? 15:52, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeppers. I just checked. Nice catch. 21:02, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink ~ 21:20, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (D) - Redone
It's a scoop of kitty Orange sherbert! OA was me and then redone by me. Stripes were unrealistic and let's just say, I'm a bit protective about my earlier chararts xD. Comments? 03:17, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head highlight/thing a tad brighter, and if there's a light source on the tail, define it. Also, *coughit'sHoneyleafnotHoneyfernchangedthatforyoucough*Sky Promises, promises 13:52, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lol, thanks Sky! I think I did that last time I had this up too. 22:34, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Brightspirit (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandy, then redone by Scarlet. Stripes were unnatural. Loonie watched me almost the entire time..and so did Rain and Hazel. xD 03:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

If you're going to use a mackerel tabby pattern, she ought to have a stripe along her spine. 03:26, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Erm... it wasn't meant to be a mackerel, but, I'll make it one for the heck of it... I don't even know what kind this was supposed to be. I just made the stripes. xD 03:29, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno, Cloudy... I hate to say it, but those stripes seem rahter hard edged and give her charart a cold feeling that doesn't suit her. It might just be me. 03:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Eh. To each their own. But, of course, I don't want to offend anyone. Does this suit your fancy? Re-uploaded. 03:47, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add some light to the forelegs, thicken and darken the stripes on the tail a touch and brighten and sharpen the ear-pink, please m'dear 03:59, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

'kay, I was having issues...so I tried something else. I've always admired the way Silverstream's alt warrior is, so I tried to use that as a base for what I've tried here. I wanted to match it the best I could, without looking like I copied it. I suck at tabbies... 04:46, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, hush, Cloudy! You do not! Maybe make the stripes around the eyes a bit thinner and make the ear-pink a bit pointier 04:54, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 05:02, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her a little <3333 so pretty. 05:25 Tue Feb 28 05:25, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:32, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

There's a teensy bit of waste around her tail. Otherwise loverly~ <3 13:15, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add a few stripes in the head area? It looks a tad bare. Sky Promises, promises 13:25, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <33  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 14:07, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:14, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste around her tail x3 04:48, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If you're still seeing the waste, the changes on the file are NOT showing. Trust me, there's no waste on this image. 04:58, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part on the haunch, and can you add a few more stripes on her face? It still looks empty. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 13:35, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

The head is fine. Not all tabbies have their head full of stripes. Plus, it's artist's choice. 17:48, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (MC) - Redone
Redid the stripes so I guess this could be considered a tweak, but you can hardly tell. I'm also tempted to give him a white chest, cause on google images, a lot of gray tabbies are shown with white or pale chests. OA was Icecould and then I redid it 03:45, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

This is so purty <333 Enlarge the 'highlight' on the haunch. 03:50 Tue Feb 28 03:50, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye Sir! 03:54, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more and maybe desaturate it a bit? 13:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should give him a pale chest C:. Blur the highlight/lighter part on the tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:09, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Elo. Go ahead and see what it looks like. Also, blur the ear pink. 21:01, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. C: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 21:34, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't really like the pale chest idea much any more cause it'd mean I have that I'd have to redo the stripes. 22:46, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think you could put the pale chest under the stripes layer, and shorten the chest stripes a little bit? 04:04, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
I seem to attract solid gray chararts. This definitely isn't my best. Comments? OA was Echomist. Just a shading tweak. 20:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

What needed to be done, and who was the OA? Also, define the ear pink. 21:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:51, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Larkwing (MC) - Redone
I tried to mimic a classic tabby. Original artist was Dawnfeather, with a redo by Mistystar, and the stripes were unrealistic. 20:54, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the markings, if you don't mind. They seem a little too hard-edged. 20:55, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading please. Lovely job. 20:59, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also gave her a furry texture. I was expecting many more comments, but oh well! 02:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Pretty. :3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  04:11, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Fish Leap (TB) ~ Redone
This is my first to-be, and probably the only one I'll ever be able to do for the project, so... comments? 20:56, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely, my denmate. <3 Could you add some depth to the tail shading to make it a little less flat? 03:58, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I also made it darker since the cite for light brown was false. 04:41, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Moonflower (W) ~ Redone
Moonflower <33 Redone because it was a triangle tabby. OA was Bramble with a tweak/redo by Leggy. Join.me w00t! Comments? 00:30 Wed Feb 29 00:30, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Holy craappppp..... O.o Darken the shading a touch and just my opinion, maybe make the stripes a pixel or two thicker. 00:54, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Woah. Blur the stripes just the tiniest bit. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  01:12, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dude. •_• Blur the tail shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 01:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. <3333  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 01:20, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8DDD Thank you all so much 03:05 Wed Feb 29

I watched you make it. 8D <3 Can you lighten the shading on the farthest (from us) hindpaw just a little bit? 03:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies Ivy You helped me so much <333 04:30 Wed Feb 29

Can you blur the stripes just a tad? Looks great! ^^ 20:06, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Wow....this is incredible!!! Just darken the earpink a little, and it'll be perfect! Sunny frost  21:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (W) ~ Redone
I like this one. 8D OA was Sand, with a redo by Icethroat, then Icestorm. Reason to be redone was because it's an unrealistic dappled tabby. The file changes aren't showing yet. Comments? 00:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Can you make it a touch lighter? It doesn't exactly scream honeyfern to me, no offense, Stoneclaw. 03:28, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, and it'd be cool if you made it a tad honey-colored. =) Just a suggestion. 04:02, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? 06:05, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Redstar (L) - Redone
Stripes needed to be redone <3 OA was Hawktalon, with a redo by Cloudy, and a tweak by moi. 02:52, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Add some stripes on this <--- flank and some shading at the bottom please! 03:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Ah, to see such a crappy image redone. It fills my heart with joy~ 8D 03:29, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the white muzzle and paws. False reference :3 03:32, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:05, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful~ 8D  20:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger. 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^  20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Shiningheart (W) ~ Redone
Fail. Dx OA was Insane, with a redo by Scarlet. Stripes were unrealistic/triangle tabby, and needed a redo. I hope the black stripes are fine, because the previous image had 'em. Comments? 06:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, stop, this is not a fail. I love it! <3 Define the shading, please? 15:06, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Pfff. Stoney, this is amazing! Blur the shading on the paws. :3  20:01, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) ~ Redone
OA is Icebrain, with a tweak and a redo later on by Scarlet. Stripes were natural. I was originally going to recycle the stripes for Mousefur's alt, but decided against it. 20:53, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dustpelt (A) - Redone
To match the warrior. Comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 21:53, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Redo/fix the earpink. It looks like some parts of it are darker than others :S Sunny  frost  22:05, February 29, 2012 (UTC)