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Ivypool (Q) ~ For Approval
Hi I'm gonna tweak this so she has shredded ears and so the shading actually looks good. Also, can we add stuff if it's a completely different side? None of the other images even show this side of her. I can take it off if I have to, don't worry.

it's all up to you what to put on the side that isn't shown, yes. 03:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

re-up

Define the light on the ---> foreleg a bit? 17:22, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred, I feel. And the shading is leaking on the stomach.

Define the tail shading?

re-up I'm gonna ask for a second opinion on the stripes because I checked and I feel like it's around the same blurriness. I'll define the light later.

Compared to the images I think the stripes could be sharpened a tiny bit. 23:26, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

re-up um do you guys see a difference here? because I don't lol

I do. Comments before approval? 01:37, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

I’m sorry, but I feel like the shading is too dark. It makes the white look a little gray here. It’s also leaking on the face

can ya make the white tailtip more visible too 23:56, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (loner) ~ For Approval
yeah i dont like this --

I think it’s good! Could you define the shading, though? 23:29, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

The stripes on the legs could be smudged out more, and maybe have one or two more stripes on the haunch that go more diagonally between the ones that go just downwards and just > way. iirc also the muzzle should be pale and the stripes go lightly over the chest, to match the other images

Dewspring (W) ~ For Approval
Cosmo made this first, so I am redoing it, but also not redoing it? I think kits were allowed to redo the chararts Cosmo originally made.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 19:17, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

We decided if she made the original image, then we would act like they were not made, so anyone could "redo" it. Add the texture and define the shading depth. 19:21, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink color needs to match the other images as well, and this seems to be a different shade^^

Add texture as well. Sorry didn’t see Vec's comment. 21:07, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

If I picked the color correctly, codes for the pelt and earpink are 7e7e7e and 896565, if that is helpful. Smooth out the shading a little bit. 22:02, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This was kinda hard... Never done texture before.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 11:31, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps define the texture. 13:04, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. 14:00, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink color is still the wrong color, and the base color looks darker on this than the other images. Might be the shading in this case, if so define the light so the base shows through, or lighten the base itself to match^

Re-uploaded 100% it's the right color now. Completely redid the shading, but I don't seem to get it right. Any tips? Also, I don't really understand what you mean with "define shading depth". Help? :P -- ~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 15:43, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

There's shading leaking behind the ---> ear. And it's okay! Shading depth is the gradience of the shading. Take a look at any object in the real world that has shadows on it. Notice how the shadows are all the same color? There's depth to it. Take a look at Broken's image above yours of Skywatcher. Notice how the shadows are blurred and have some depth (ie are not the same color)? The shading in the center of the image is different from the shading near the lineart.

One way to add shading depth, add another layer on top of your preexisting shading layer. Add some more shading with whatever color you used prior but make it a bit darker and recede it a bit so the first shading layer is shown. Blurr/smudge it however you want and lower the opacity so that it seems smooth against the other shading layer. Most people use 2 to whatever shading layers. I hope this helps ^^ 19:29, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Here some visual aids for you. Here are my shading layers for Parsleyseed. You don't have to have that many, but I tend to be messy with shading. It's all about your preference. Here is just my first layer of shading. The left side has the opacity lowered, while the right side has it raised so you can see it. Here are the second layer and third layer of shading. Each layer is smoothed and has its opacity lowered so it appears to blend in. :D 19:51, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Vec! I played around with some different layers and I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. ~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 20:04, June 19, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs/paws ear/head area, and muzzle, there's a few out of place lighter pixels on the back, shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back/rump, and texture is leaking away from the lineart on the chest, both sides of the tail, back paws, muzzle, and < front leg

Probably define the texture, tone down the tail texture as it kind of looks out of place, maybe add more texture lines, and smooth out the shading.

Pinenose (Ro) - For Approval
04:16, June 19, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading?

Reuploaded. 21:01, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

can u smooth it out some more? 23:57, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:19, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (MCA) - CBA


Could you try to brighten the white on his chest? It looks a little grey to me right now. 15:17, June 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA?

Rascal (GC) ~ For Approval
Experimented with stripes. Also, 'bout to head out for a long road trip so I may not update right away. 03:53, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

He looks too greenish-brown, mostly on the paler parts. 20:46, 6/23/2018

I feel like there'd be a little bit of shadow on the chest/neck area. 23:55, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 01:55, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Boots (GC) ~ For Approval
I decided to keep the pattern because I really liked it. Comments? 03:58, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

maybe define the shading everywhere a bit?

Reuploaded. 18:08, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

Cobweb (GC) - For Approval
I'm gonna mess with the colors and shading. Just wanted to get this posted. 15:22 Fri Jun 22

Reuploaded 15:52 Fri Jun 22

Again I can't get it to look how I want -___- 16:56 Fri Jun 22

Could you lighten the texture just a little? It seems a little rough, in some parts? It could just be me though. But I am the Chosen One 16:57, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shoulder shading.

The shading looks a little flat. Could you add more depth? This is nice, though! 20:56, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid it (again). The pale is light silver, not white btw 00:42 Sun Jun 24

I know you said it isn't white, but could you dull it down just a bit more? 02:02, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Dotty (GC) ~ For Approval
I like it now. 19:45, 6/23/2018

Define the shading just a little bit? Also, maybe smudge the white where it meets the ginger? Totally up to you if you want to do that. This looks awesome either way, though. Well done! (  21:49, 6/23/2018  ) ​

define the shading depth on the legs a bit 23:54, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

I think there is white leaking onto the shoulder and haunch fur a bit. Unless that's part of the design (which is beautiful btw ^^) 01:57, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :D 02:57, 6/24/2018

Feather (GC) - For Approval
this shading i hate it 20:08, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading just a bit.

maybe expand the shading slightly as well? 23:52, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Pipsqueak (GC) - For Approval


This is lovely! The shading is leaking on the tail, front leg closest to us, back leg, and the face. 21:58, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Mittens (GC) ~ For Approval
the slinky malinki herself. 23:43, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

This is very pretty :o. Could you define the shading on the tail? I can't tell where it is. 00:08, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Peanut (GC) ~ For Approval
pfft i spent an hour and a half trying to shade this, i might redo the shading. love the new blanks though! 00:56, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Add the herbs, as she's a healer. 01:55, June 24, 2018 (UTC)