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White striped rogue (Ro) ~ CBA
Alright, assuming I found the right cat, I think I did this pattern right, though the pattern changes with each square, so... corrections would be greatly appreciated. Also, the file name is Rogue One :P

could you smooth out the shading on the back-back leg? (idk if that makes sense) 09:22, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light at the base of the tail a bit more? 18:39, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading on the neck a little? 20:35 Sat Mar 23

Reuploaded I just saw the two latest comments now so I'll fix it next time 20:41, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, don't believe there'd be any shading on the back; it'd be expanded on the belly and upwards to form the haunch and back of the shoulder. There'd also be a touch on the base of the chest; and a bit more light on the topside of the < side of the tail

Can you smooth out the shading in the belly area a bit? 23:43, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading maybe this works now 00:00, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and ears. 19:53, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

And the face too!^^ 22:08, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:21, March 26, 2019 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the shading leaking on the belly?

Yep. Also, define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 21:57, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

The shading below the back of the head around the shoulder area looks a little too dark compared to the rest of it. 14:39, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:46, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Tortie and white rogue ~ for approval
ew how did i regress so much in one day sksks

12:53, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Would you be able to define the shading any? The pattern placement here is making seeing the shading extremely difficult. ​​​

Still working? 01:18, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Stone Song (PoT) (L) - CBA
Don't know about these stripes. I know they don't match as well, don't comment on that I'm going to fix it. 00:18 Mon Mar 25

Could you expand that left earpink down? It looks odd and it seems lije it cuts off half way 11:47, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more? 22:11, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:18 Thu Mar 28

CBA?

Unknown residence blanks - for approval
Bam. thanks so much guys i appreciate it :3 13:55, 3/25/2019

can you shrink the blanks? they look awfully big compared to the rest. 15:08, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ears need to be smaller (height-wise) and possibly rounder. 16:47, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

I like these Winter, but can you shorten the noses a bit? By two pixels? 22:09, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can't pretend to be any expert in cat anatomy, but should the tail but arched over the back for balance? 23:11, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

The nose looks fine imo Malina457 (talk) 15:59, March 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

The tail on the shorthair should taper out towards the tip. Also, there's a stray pixel to the right of the shorthair's chin  16:02, March 26, 2019 (UTC)

Is it possible to remove the third and fourth line on the front leg farthest from us? Right now, it looks the like the cats have six toes. I suck at anatomy so you don't nescessarily have to do it. :) 23:35, March 26, 2019 (UTC)

Thats the dew claw though? Also yeah the noses are fine. If i shorten them itll look weird. Also no the tail was like that in the ref i used. Im caught on mobile rn and will work on fixing the issues tomorrow 00:08, 3/27/2019

Paw looks fine too Malina457 (talk) 00:26, March 27, 2019 (UTC)malina

i think the issue that potato was talking about regarding the nose is that the entire face is exaggerated to be slightly wider as a part of a style. im not sure if blanks are allowed to be stylized this way, but if it is necessary for it to be anatomically correct i believe that [https://images.unsplash.com/photo-1518791841217-8f162f1e1131?ixlib=rb-1.2.1&ixid=eyJhcHBfaWQiOjEyMDd9&w=1000&q=80 the muzzle should be rounded (and shortened), as well as the nose. i also think that the eyes should be shrunken as they shouldnt take up such a huge proportion of the face]. 00:50, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

silver tabby warrior (warrior) ~ for approval
meh -- 10:34, 3/27/2019

I believe the stripes need to be black since she's a silver tabby. Could you make the stripes less paintbrushy and perhaps add more variation?

hm it's black ^^ i'd do the other thing you mentioned though. -- 11:14, 3/27/2019

reups how about now? -- 11:22, 3/27/2019

could you possibly thicken the stripes on the tail or add some more so its not so spacious?  Ellie  life is an illusion 13:50, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add/define the shading in the -> ear? 15:21, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

You forgot to add the back paw farthest from us' color 19:17, 3/27/2019

Can you smooth out the shading on the chest just a little? 23:19, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

reups i didnt know it was a backpaw lol -- 06:46, 3/28/2019

Hmm might be controversial but I think the dorsal stripe shouldn't be on the bottom of the tail. That would mean the tail is flipped upside down which is sort of awkward.

may i have a second...? if you picture the tail up instead of down, the dorsal stripe is correct...? im not sure what to do about that. -- 07:54, 3/29/2019

I agree with Fox, that dorsal stripe doesn't look right. (Oh no I'm rapping help!) 13:03, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

But if you picture the tail going up it looks fine if silver switched it and it went up half the stripe would be on the bottom Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 13:05, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think it's in the right direction... Fox, would you have any redline or idea as to how you think it would look? I do agree with Squid and Silver and I think it's right, but I'm curious as to how you think it would go?

Pale she-cat (ToEH) ~ For Approval
so I used an OC for this; lowkey made her an albino cat. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:18, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and arm? 15:22, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if this is the tint or not.. but she barely looks white on my screen. Maybe try changing the shading tint or lighten the texture. This is your preference, so you don't have to do it. Expanding on to Patch's comment, the shading needs to be smoothed everywhere actually. 22:00, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

The character's described as "pale", meaning that the colour won't necessarily be white but just a lighter colour (so pale grey works fine). 22:57 Wed Mar 27 2019

The shading looks smooth everywhere but the haunch and arm, so could I get a second coz if I smooth those already smoothed parts more I'll have tod efine the depth and that'll just be repeating the process. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:00, March 27, 2019 (UTC)

yeah i agree with mink that the shading is fine except for on the haunch 00:07, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

I actually agree with Potato that it could use some smoothing out pretty much everywhere. The face and haunch especially. ​​​

Re-Ups, tried to smooth as best i could lol hopefully this is good? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:25, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch a little bit more, especially on the top and bottom of it (where it connects with the tail and the arm).

Snowdrop (KP) - For Approval
01:42, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Are the lines/stripes a texture or fur pattern? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  18:56, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the texture a little bit because it's making the image look slightly gray (at least on my screen), and Snowdrop was described as pure white. 20:02, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

That is texture. Can you also define the eye depth a tad more? If not, it's totally fine. ;) 21:51, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the texture to the space of fur between the collar and the cheek? It cuts off abtruptly there  22:43, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just removed the texture altogether. 01:37, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Dark brown Riverclan Warrior ~ For Approval
Meh, it's okay...I hope I named this right -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  02:44, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. 04:24, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

define light on the end of the tail more? -- 06:30, 3/28/2019

Define the light on the ears and smooth out the shading. 13:02, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! I also changed the eyes and texture a bit ^^ -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  18:55, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make sure all the texture is flowing in the direction of the body. Also, would you mind changing the base of this, as it looks green (on my computer screen yes). < this ear has some grayish pixels in it and lastly, is the nose filled in? I can't tell. What a handsome cat. 21:54, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I looked at it and it wasn't green? Who knows gh  -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  01:07, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

That's better, but smooth out the shading on the tail-tip, and make the texture flow with the tail. 02:23, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  04:23, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Still looks a bit green. maybe saturate the color

Reuploded! Is that better? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  15:25, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

OS-1.warrior-8 ~ For Approval
15:41, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the legs. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:18, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't define the shading, just fixed some spots up. The shading on the legs is already defined I think, and if I made it any darker it would be too much. However, if anyone else disagrees with me I will define it. 17:37, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Shading looks good to me patch Malina457 (talk) 19:43, March 29, 2019 (UTC)malina

Pad (ki)-for evalulation
did i name this rightWillowstep12 (talk) 15:43, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

am i allowed to do this?Willowstep12 (talk) 15:45, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

I'm honestly not sure given that this is a blank redo. As one of Broken's images, would this count as an original technically?

...sorry i did not knowWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Were...were kits even decided to be done yet? I don't recall a verdict being reached.

19:45, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Kits will be done next month. However, this can be converted a to minor character (like a tortie kit) if you make it look like one Willow. For now, it doesn't appear you saved the image correctly, as this is a thumbnail. Click the image on the main page, click the file name, then right click and click "Save as" and name it, for example, TPB-kit-2 and the .png will stick on the end. It doesn't appear you are using layers as the colors are leaking past the lineart. See Apprentice Tutorials. Add shading to the front leg, face, and tail. The remaining shading needs to be blended. You can try the Smudge tool (10 pixels at 40 percent is best.) Make sure to take you time! 22:00, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

The lines seem to be somewhat blurry, similar to what Greenflower said. Also, maybe add some depth to the eyes as well as shines? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  01:11, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

i will try, its my first charartWillowstep12 (talk) 18:21, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

where should i place the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 19:16, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a tutorial on light sources in the Apprentice Tutorials. 22:08, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Tortoiseshell SC Warrior 1 (OS-1) - For Approval
I have no clue if I named this properly. Its the first tortie ShadowClan warrior from Into the Wild. <span style="">21:59 Thu Mar 28

There are these weird red lines outside the eyes. Is it possible to make this less cross-eyed? 22:01, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

What red lines? And I can mess with the highlights in the eye, but the pupils are actually centered. <span style="">22:04 Thu Mar 28

Never mind, I think my eyes are doing something.. 22:18, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made her a chocolate tortie but I may revert it or make her patchy I'm not too sure about it <span style="">21:50 Fri Mar 29

Little gray-and-white kit - For Approval
Sweet little boy. I got the file name wrong but I'll change it right now  23:16, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Adorable! Since this has furry shading, the white looks a little off since it's more straight edged and doesn't have any furry-ness to it. Maybe smudge it a bit?

Muscular tabby (DF) ~ For Approval
I did this on the bus lol. 01:41, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Controversial critique, but can you make the eyes less purple? Cats don't have purple eyes, and if you look them up, it's just PSed images. You don't have to do this, however. ;) 02:07, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

The eye's don't look overly purple, Silver Stripe's eyes come to mind, this image is fine Malina457 (talk) 02:35, March 29, 2019 (UTC)malina

This series is unrealistic, and we have at least one character mistakenly mentioned with purple eyes, and one with purpleish-blue eyes. The eyes are fine as they are.

Black ShadowClan Warrior (W) - For Approval
this is the warrior that attacks darkstripe :D 03:46 Fri Mar 29 2019

can you smooth out the shading? (lowkey flexing my bright af screen in which i can actually see the shading) 12:33, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded this is as smooth as I can get it in sai? so hopefully that's alright 21:12 Fri Mar 29 2019

Tabby warrior ~ For Approval


Could you define facial shading just a tiny bit? 21:12 Fri Mar 29 2019

tabby warrior-for approval
tfw spring break starts and you chose to draw cats over anything else you couldve done 15:00, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading more? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  15:26, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup 15:48, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the eye color some, they seem gray? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:17, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes are green for me. 22:07, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

ShadowClan Tortoiseshell - For Approval
I'll fix the shading next upload but for now, here it is. This is not the scrawny tortoiseshell - it is a different cat. 17:02, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

I've just realised I made the legs a different colour to the chest I'll be fixing that too. 17:03, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth those dark patches? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:16, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

BP Tabby ThunderClan Warrior (W) - For Approval
20:15, March 29, 2019 (UTC)