Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Molepaw (OTS) ~ Silver nomination
I know,it needs improvements, but I am willing to nominate him for silver status. Comments? 04:13, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Expand NIght Whispers. 01:30 Thu Dec 8

In the Forgotten Warrior, can you possibly add in when Jayfeather goes into Molepaw's mind and sees the fox moment, and describe the moment? 04:49, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also add in a better main quote, and add some to the bottom? 04:50, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 00:10 Wed Dec 14

Yep, starting now. -- 01:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

In The Forgotten Warrior, it isn't explained why Molepaw gave in and let Firestar apprentice him to Rosepetal, it just says that it does. Could you add that in, please? 22:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I added that. I'll work on the quotes now. 00:17, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you get another quote in there please? 15:28 Mon Dec 26

Are you still working on this? If possible, the quote section should contain 3 quotes, like Sweetflower said. 22:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mallownose ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all history sections, and added in two quotes. Comments? 00:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Rephrase the second paragraph in Dark River. 00:17, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 23:45, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Expand TFA more is you can .21:31 Sat Dec 24

Any other quotes? This looks great! 00:50, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

No more quotes, and I can't expand anymore. That's all he appears. 05:34, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 06:42, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Vixenkit ~ Silver Nomination
I've expanded as much as possible, since she's only mentioned in 2 sentences...comments? 02:01, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Any other quotes? 05:15, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

There is pretty much nothing wrong with it, except can you make the part where Vxenkit is arguing with Silverkit? And that section could be expanded more by putting in how Silverkit had to sleep with them or putting in that part where Silverkit mentions that she is bigger than Vixenkit. 19:05, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Done.-- 04:15, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 06:42, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Gray Sky Before Dawn - Silver Nomination
Strangely drawn to this one. I expanded a lot of Outcast, and I'll work on Sign of the Moon soon too. I can already think of one or two quotes that describe his personality more. So, comments and suggestions? 23:59, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I was gonna do him. :P Just add some quotes expand SOtM and he's good. 00:13 Sat Dec 24

Sorry, Sweetflower! x3 I changed the main quote because I didn't really like the one before (no offense to anybody who did), added more quotes, and expanded SoTM. 02:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok. And the main quote is good now. 02:49 Sat Dec 24

I did a bit of expanding. 01:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 22:45, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Jingo - Silver Nomination
History has been expanded big time, and I'll be adding quotes. Comments? 22:02, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Break up some paragraphs in the history. Apart from that and no quotes, this article is awesome! 00:44, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

(Just letting you know) I made it bronze. 02:53 Sun Dec 25

This is great! I know you're gonna be dealing with the quotes, but could you make the main quote show her personality more? 00:17, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I've been doing a bit of expanding as the ending was cut short due to a turn on my time table. Anyways, I'll be getting that done. =3 18:28, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! Just add more quotes if possible, and this can be CBVed. 22:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nicknames?
Should there be a nickname space on Jayfeather's characat, I'm only asking because Lionblaze called him 'Jay' and I'm not sure if we should add them in for the char. that were called something shorter than their usual name (but not something like 'mousebrain' or whatever) so what do you guys think? I'm not part of this project but I was just thinking about it. 16:04, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Mhm, it's a good idea, it really is, but personally, I don't think we need it. It's not like every cat has a nickname, and it'd be weird just having one cat with this nickname section. 16:12 Mon Dec 26

And Poppydawn also called Sweetpaw 'Sweet' so two cats, xD 16:54, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but, with Sweetpaw, it was her daughter. :P 17:11 Mon Dec 26

Due to the fact that it's not the majority of cats being called by their name prefix, I think it'd just fit in the Trivia with a citation if it's not there already. 22:20, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think that's a good idea! ^ 22:59 Mon Dec 26

I agree with Atelda. *going into picky mode* I asked Kate once on her blog about when Lionblaze called Jayfeather "Jay", and she said it was a mistake because she was so used to calling him by the first part of his name, so I always considered it more of an error than a nickname. :P *picky mode over* 02:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Good point Hollydapple. It like saying someone's human name is Jessica. Their nickname might be Jess. It's not like it's an official name or anything. 01:37, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Exactly. Adding it to the trivia is enough, so it doesn't count as an official name. We'll just keep it the way it is. 06:28, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Removing to elders
I think we should start moving people who haven't contributed to PC for 4-6+ months should be made elders. It makes sense doesn't it? What do you think? 21:56 Mon Dec 26

It makes sense, but why do we even need an elders section? If the user is inactive, why do they deserve to still be in PC? If they still would like to be in PC, they can rejoin. 22:23, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I see your point. :3 If they are just in the table, for the sake of it, and not contributing, the don't deserve to be in PC. If they said something about going away for a certain time period. Than that'd probably be okay. 22:53 Mon Dec 26

Maybe if you haven't contributed in PC between 1 and 2 months, you could go on the elder list, and after that if they haven't contributed in 1 to 2 months while they've been on the elder list they could be removed from the project. I think PB and PW do this. <span style="">23:27, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

But honestly, why do we need the elders rank? If the user isn't contributing to the project, then they shouldn't be in the project. I, Mistystar, and Moonflight clean out the members list from time to time. I don't see why we must have another rank for inactive members. 15:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't think we need an elders section. If their inactive and don't perticipate in the project for a certain amount of tim ethey might as well be removed. <span style="">19:35 Sat Dec 31

I suppose. It doesn't really bother me, as I try to be active. <span style="">00:36, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Well, I guess we have an elders section to relate to the warriors books, to "honor" those who once "served" this project. I know that not all of e elders actually contributed to the project, but...oh well. If more people do want the elders rank deleted, we can have a vote, but it does have a purpose. 06:41, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Flower (Ro) ~ Silver Nomination
So sorry that I haven't been here.. I missed editing articles, (more than usual, at least) so I have decided to come back from the dead. I edited Flower just a tad, since there really wasn't anything to add. It is really similar to Warriors App paragraph, like as if the person just copied it right off of there. Should I fix it a bit, or should I just leave it as it is? 03:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Which Flower. Flower Sharpclaw's sister, or Flower the loner who was mentioned in Sunrise? <span style="">17:09 Tue Dec 27

Argh, though I had the right page... Dumb computer. >.< Flower as in Sharpclaws sister, sorry about that. :3 (I'll change the link)  01:57, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Any quotes? I'm not sure that Warriors App only characters get quotes. <span style="">01:44, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

You could probably use the same quote I used for Jessamy. 01:51, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Oblivion. I'll go add it. ^-^  20:37, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Olivenose ~ Silver Nomination
I like her name. :3 Comments? <span style="">17:17 Tue Dec 27

Quotes are on the way. <span style="">17:31 Tue Dec 27

Could you expand Battles of the Clans any more? 00:58, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded by two words, that's all I could. xD <span style="">18:05 Wed Dec 28

Quotes are done. <span style="">21:15 Wed Dec 28

Echomist ~ Silver Nomination
Quotes are on the way! Comments? <span style="">17:21 Tue Dec 27

Could you possibly make a new section for Into the Wild and add how she wasn't in the allegiances there? 01:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

She might have died before than though. If ya read the last sentence in her CP section, it says she might have died. :D <span style="">17:51 Wed Dec 28

Quotes are added. <span style="">21:13 Wed Dec 28

Jessamy - Silver Nomination
All right, I hope I can remember how to do this. I added a quote that isn't really a quote, but her history looks good to me. 02:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice so far. The first paragraph in her history section seems to describe Sharpclaw more than her. 17:16, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed, hopefully. 01:15, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still describes Sharpclaw more. I suggest perhaps just deleting the whole paragraph, unless you can find a way to emerge it into the other sections. <span style="">01:51, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Deleted. 01:53, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cinders - Silver Nomination
I liked her for some reason. I made her bronze status. Comments? 03:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I rewrote 98% of her history. Will work on the quotes tomorrow. 04:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, minor expanding, added references for all her family, and worked on the quotes. I'll shut up now. x3 19:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Furzepelt - Silver Nomination
I added quotes, which was pretty much all she needed. 01:55, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly detail The Sign of the Moon just a bit more? 20:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:01, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Mouthclaw - Silver Nomination
I expanded the history by 2 paragraphs, added references and a see also. Comments? <span style="">02:04, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Can you make the second paragraph flow a bit more? And can you explain what the Clan cats do after they learn what Mouthclaw did? (if that makes any sense xD)  03:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Like this? I added a whole new paragraph to the trouble that Sunpelt gets in, if that's what you mean. <span style="">23:41, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

I just realised I need to add quotes. They will be coming in a moment. <span style="">23:49, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

No, I think you should delete that paragraph, in my opinion. I just realized that I asked you to write more about Sunpelt that Mouthclaw, my bad... >.<  19:12, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thats okay xD I expanded the last paragraph more and added quotes. I'm not sure about the quotes though, as she's only mentioned in, 2 pages -_- <span style="">01:32, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

The history is pretty well-written, but it switches between the past tense ("She had killed many cats from all the Clans and was feared by every cat.") and the present tense ("Sunpelt, a warrior of LionClan, thinks he can defeat Mouthclaw and prove what a brave warrior he is, so he plans to kill her.") several times. Would you mind changing that, please? 18:38, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed everything into present tense, but I don't know what to do with that was. I can't think of a better word for it, because if I changed it, it wouldn't make sence. <span style="">01:14, Thu, Jan, 5, 2012

Onestar-Silver Nomination
I would like to nominate Onestar, any coments?

Add a section for The Forgotten Warrior. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  02:29 Fri Dec 30

where would i add it

Under the section for Sign of the Moon. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  02:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Firestar's Quest? I haven't read that book in a while, so I don't know if there's anything *to* expand. :P 02:58, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

ok, any more comments there is nothing to add on firestars quest.

Expand Dawn. <span style="">18:41 Fri Dec 30

The style in Fire and Ice could use some work, Forest of Secrets might be possible to expand, The Darkest Hour needs to focus more on Onestar, Eclipse needs expanding, and The Forgotten Warrior does too. 21:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

i havent read the forgotten warrior what do i do

Use the browse inside of it. <span style="">23:18, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Rabbitstar ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote. I think that the overall history looks good. Comments? 01:16, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand his history anymore, or add anymore quotes? <span style="">04:14 Sun Jan 1

Can you detail/make the last sentence of his history flow more? 21:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Of course I can; All set! 21:53, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you expand/rewrite the last paragraph? 18:30, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

All set. 20:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Heatherstar - Silver Nomination
I think she's ready for a silver nomination. Comments? 03:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

The page seems pretty good, but maybe the history should be expanded a bit? I have not read any of those books for a while, so you may have everything, but filling in any history gaps would make the article more informative, thus qualifying it for sliver. ;D Just Dance   Gonna be okay...

Can you rephrase the first paragraph in Bluestar's Prophecy? 19:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? <span style="">18:38 Tue Jan 3

I don't think we need to add that her deputy, Reedfeather was almost drowned in the Battle of the Clans paragraph, in my opinion. 22:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I meant the third paragraph in BP, sorry. *headdesk* The first paragraph is fine. 15:36, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Done. (^.^) 16:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbittail - Silver Nomination
I added some quotes. I think they describe him pretty well. Comments? 04:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Should you describe that in WindClan, they had picked out warriors to travel down in the tunnels in the beginning? 04:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I will, but, where would I add that? 04:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I added it into the quotes section. If it should be moved just tell me. 06:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) - Silver Nomination
I've always loved her too! Comments? <span style="">18:33 Tue Jan 3

Can you detail Night Whispers a tad bit more? 21:07, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you work on The Sight? Just some rewording, and explain why Ivytail got first pick off the fresh-kill pile during the Daylight Gathering. 21:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand Outcast and Dark River? 21:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Done with The Sight and Night Whispers. I'll get on with Dark River and Outcast. <span style="">21:37 Thu Jan 5

Epico. 22:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Percy - Silver Nomination
Needs work, yes. Comments? 21:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. The history needs expanding majorly, and the quotes need to show more of his personality. 21:49, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Changed the main quote, rewrote the history, and worked on the quotes. 22:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

All in all, though it may be a short article, it is very well-written. Possibly expand the history slightly? Just Dance  Gonna be okay...

Thank you, Soleil. ^_^ Did some minor expanding, but I'll probably do more later on. 18:29, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nettleclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I added the only quote relating to him, and expanded his history as much as possible. Comments? 00:16, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I made a Beyond the Code section for her, and overall it looks good to me. Quotes will be added soon. 02:20, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Well done. My only suggestion would be to find a main quote that describes her a little more. 15:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart - Silver Nomination
I added 2 quotes as well as adding a description and rewrote the second paragraph of BP. Comments? 22:24, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sol's Father - Character page?
I believe that if Shellheart's Grandfather gets a page, then Sol's father should get one as well. He was in the SkyClan manga, and was actually shown in it. Anyone agree/disagree? 00:33, January 6, 2012 (UTC)