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Grasspelt (Star) - For Approval
-sobs- More dying kittehs! 01:21, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define it on the paws. 06:57, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re Uploaded 14:22, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink, define the lightsource as the tail tells me it's coming from one direction and the rest of the body tells me another direction. And the body shading is leaking away from the lineart and where the tail is on the body. And wouldn't this have to be under the old post or at least the old post archived before this being reposted? Not sure, maybe someone can give second opinion? 14:31, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think Tiger's fine with it being here- she was told in chat to just make a new section and the old post would be archived. I also think that smudging the earpink is optional? But I reccomend it, especially on these blanks.

Define the earpink and the face shading. 15:04, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly brighten the earpink? It looks as though it blends completely and that there is no earpink at all. 21:36, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re Uploaded People on the chat said the lightsource and "leaking" line art was fine so I didn't change it. 23:07, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re re uploaded. I brightened up the earpink. 23:33, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

It would be shaded fully behind the tail. The shading shapes around it at the moment. At least shade that over. 00:49, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail? 00:56, 10/14/2014

Add and define the shading along the edges.-- 01:24, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading, too. 09:33, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

The ears are beautiful. Good job Tigerbird with brightening them up. I don't know if you could make it any better. 11:15, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smear the fur into the earpink a bit more. I also think there is receding shading on the side, around the tail tip. 16:02, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reupped I think smearing fur is optional but I did everything ya'll suggested. 00:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

It's not always optional. On some blanks it can be necessary, especially on these. Define the light on the paws and tail, and then lighten your shading a bit and blur it. I still see receding shading around the haunch and around the tail tip. 16:00, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Pretty sure it's optional tbh but anyhoo I don't think changes are showing (for anyone) 4:31 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014

It is not mandatory on any blank, Darkfrost. That's a very common and quite annoying PCA rumor among members that needs to stop. You can blur the ear pink (as I used to do and sometimes still do) and get the same desired results. Also, no, the changes don't seem to be showing for me either.

Re upped If the changes aren't showing, notify me at once. 22:13, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receding from the lineart on the stomach around where the tailtip is. 15:36 Sun Oct 19

Re upped 15:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the base to about #A06F44, Tiger. This is a little bit too dark for being a light brown cat.

I will re upload sometime today or tomorrow. 13:16, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face 16:35 Thu Oct 23

Just letting you know, Tiger, that you have until Sunday to reupload, since we only allow one week without uploads before declining an image.

Re upped There is a block of waste and I can't get rid of it. 15:39, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Take a size 1 hard edged eraser to it, being careful not to touch the lineart, and it'll be gone in a jiffy. 15:50, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped I additionally defined the tail shading. 18:38, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Try adding some shading to the neck, I think the head would cast some shadow over it. 17:41, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

We agreed on the chat to leave it as it is. 20:17, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped 20:46, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tangle so... hehe. I was working on Tangle during my vacation cause I was bored ._. anywho, :3  02:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the shading and lighten it some. 07:03, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Also, would you like the file for the apprentice, so you can get the colors right? 08:09, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:50, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste everywhere, and IDK if its just me or the waste, but the lineart seems blurred? 13:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Waste will be the death of me xD 14:00, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Work on the texture a bit. 3:16 PM, Tue Oct 14, 2014

The file should be named Tangleburr.kit, not Tangleburr (KI). Brick  The Bite of '87  15:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed nameing and tried to texture it. 15:51, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail - she's so cute! 16:01, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you :3 16:11, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

This looks good. :) Just shift that chin shading down slightly so it's below the chin. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 16:32, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 16:39, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Ah hold up I had to fix some waste I didn't see Reups 16:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Tangleburr.kit. As for the image, try blurring the shading on the front paws a bit? Brick  The Bite of '87  18:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Renamed it correct finally sorry about that ugh I feel so n00bish... 19:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste around the feet. Also, I feel bad for pestering you so much about this, but I think it should be in lowercase, so .kit instead of .Kit   but i'm not sure because i'm not sure if the wikia is caps-sensitive or not so it might not matter. Brick  The Bite of '87  20:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't feel bad. I'd rater do it the right way than the wrong. 20:52, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws. This is pretty, Vixy. =) 15:56, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :D 19:48, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shapren the texture a bit to match the other images. Nice job! 1:30 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Reuploaded Thankes :DDD I'm so proud of her so far :3 13:47, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Expand your shading a bit. And smudge/blur your shading a little after that. 20:00, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 15:24, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Might just be my eyes, but I can see some waste around the head. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. 21:04, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded There was a tiny bit so I erased it. Thanks! ^^ Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 02:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Comments? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 10:35, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the back 15:08, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 16:16, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the back shading a little, I can't really see the pattern through it. 20:05, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it just fine- perhaps it's the brightness on your screen? I know each monitor shows different things. Blur the neck shading just a bit, Vixen, if you don't mind?

Reuploaded I blurred the neck :3 Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 22:16, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

I can't really see the texture through the neck shading. It's almost like it's been overblurred. Perhaps define the texture under it and and lighten the shading a tad? 15:54, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 23:31, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Half Moon (Ancient) - CBA
meh. 00:52, 10/15/2014

Smooth out the shading on the tail and perhaps brighten up the entire left (our left) side of her, especially on the head. There's a lot of shading and that looks really gray.

Reuploaded 05:15, 10/18/2014

Smooth out the shading some more on the face. 23:13 Sat Oct 18

Still working? 15:08, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah sorry. Reup 20:08, 10/24/2014

I think the tail shading could be smoothed out a little more, and the light expanded on it.

reup  08:00, 10/26/2014

There's a bit of waste at the top of the tail. 09:04 Sun Oct 26

reup 09:08, 10/26/2014

CBA? I like this. 1:00 Mon Oct 27

Graywing (WC) (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I've added to the table now. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and then define it everywhere. 08:36, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Also, the wiki is case-sensitive, the file should be named Graywing (WC).ancient.png, not Graywing_(WC).Ancient.png. 08:55, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have a ripped eartip? RaisuRice (talk) 14:12, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think so, because when he was in the tribe, he didn't have the ripped ear tip. Define the light on his forepaws. 14:31, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Try to give the shading more shape. You could use some shading on his shoulder, have it line the inner edge of his tail instead of just being in the tip, more shading higher up on the neck, and shading along his cheek. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:09, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I've redone the shading and renamed the file. I have already checked when Graywing got the ripped ear tip and it was in The First Battle I believe so he had no ripped ear tip as an ancient tribe member. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I know this sounds weird but define the tongue shading lmao. 21:45, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload this is a really new template XD --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:57, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. ikr xD 20:07, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I thought I'd change the eye as well. How he looked directly towards us looks a bit creepy, and his not a creepy cat. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:51, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading should be extended and up towards the back. It would kinda look like a "C", I think.

Reupload Like that? --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

The left front paw and chest seem very dark. Maybe lighten it up a bit? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 17:38, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the leg underneath the paw? 6:17 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and try to give a little more of a curve to the shading. Look at some of the other images for examples of what I mean. It doesn't really go with the body as well as I think it could. The body shading kinda seems like a straight line.. or something along those lines. I can't phrase things correctly, my apologies. x.x

Reupload I've added a bit more shading at the tip of his tail and base of his tail. I've done a highlight around the tail facing away from the body and I've blurred the overall shading a bit. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:53, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs <span style="">16:37 Thu Oct 23

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe make the tongue more pink? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 13:35, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:38, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws, and it appears the body shading is leaking away from the lineart. This is looking very nice! 15:57, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

The paws are just shading and I don't know how to deal with shading leaking away from the lineart. and Thankyou! --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:25, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Add more shading near the lineart and only blur part of it (the part that's away from the lineart) <span style="">3:33 AM, Sun Oct 26, 2014

Reupload Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:28, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Add more shading to the haunch/back leg/hip/whatever it is and define the light on the tail. <span style="">6:31 AM, Sun Oct 26, 2014

Reupload I think it's his side, belly to back. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure that there would be some light on the paws, though. 17:14, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I've added a bit to his right paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:44, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Hawk Swoop (Ancient Tribe) - For Approval
comments? I haven't done these for a while — <span style="">Sun Oct 19 00:37

This looks great. :) Maybe a bit more shading on that left (higher) paw, and that nose and muzzle? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:28, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

reups thank you c: — <span style="">Sun Oct 19 01:47

Wow it's beautiful. Could you possibly blur the stripes? 19:51, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes aren't really blurred on her other images, which this one has to match.

I used SAI for this one, so the brush left a sharp edge on them anyway. I think they are fine. but if someone else says something I'll tinker them. — <span style="">Tue Oct 21 04:57

i think they could be blurred the tinest bit, theyre slightly softer looking on the other images. 01:05, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. Words can't describe this beautiful image. <span style="">16:41 Thu Oct 23

Smudge/blur the shading. I like this. 20:02, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

yea i probably won't be able to work on this due to school. — <span style="">Fri Oct 24 21:35

I'd like to take over on this 21:39, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

re-up ik ik i didn't give her much justice ;; 16:08, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps blur the stripes on the shoulder? They seem more hard-edged than the rest. <span style="">23:40 Sat Oct 25

They're supposed to be smudged lightly, actually, as that's what Leggo told me how they were done ;; 23:45, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

re-up did some things 13:02, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Silver Frost (Ancient) ~ Declined
Well this is it i love her eyes.Warriorsbutterminecraft (talk) 16:46, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

The patches need to match her other images and she shading looks a bit blotchy and sourceless. Also the file needs to be named File:Silver Frost.ancient.png, so please fix that. <span style="">5:29 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Reups.--Warriorsbutterminecraft (talk) 02:41, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

The patches should be solid not smudged. Are changes showing? Try uploading to ezimba.com. <span style="">5:37 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

Crop the space around the image so that it is more of similar size to the other images. 17:40, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading too.

I'm gonna rename this for you, since the images won't show right on the articles without it.

Is this still being worked on?

Sorry, but as per the one-week guideline, I must decline this. Anyone without a project may take this on if they wish- you don't need to ask, just reserve it.

Sandypaw (App) - CBA
I actually did this a while back, just to practice texture. Now that Sandypaw's gender has been confirmed, it fit. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:33, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Finally! Gorgeous! Maybe just define the light on the legs? 18:48, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. :) Defined. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 19:16, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the shading on the chest. This is purrty! =) 15:15, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And thanks. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:10, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail?

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:22, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 17:17, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Sharp Hail (Ancient) - CBA
I imagine him as a longhair so that's what y'all get. Comments? 20:29, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="">21:32 Tue Oct 21

re-up 21:36, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

re-up, forgot texture 21:39, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

re-up did a thing with the tail 21:45, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

The body shading looks a little like a rectangle. Could you manipulate it a bit to make it look more natural? This is pretty! 15:17, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 19:03, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing for something else 21:39, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

I'm taking over on this one because his name is cool.

Re-uploaded. Okay, I like this one a lot more than I did Clear Sky's image.

Can I just kinda CBA this? 16:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o  ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either.

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  -  Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? <span style="">20:09, 10/24/2014

Re-uploaded - I tried x3 -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll work on it, in a few hours. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

You see the shading that's on...uh, I want to say the lower back? Pretty sure that's what that is... can you smooth that out a bit? I'm not sure the smudges should be so visible.

Tornear (Kit) - For Approval
Um... This is my first try. Took so long on it, the pattern was kind of hard to match.

The Fox Girl (talk) 10:46, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, and you weren't on the table, so I added it in for you. Define the shading- very pretty for a first try, I must say. 11:09, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks :) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:29, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes very good for a first try  <span style="">16:47 Thu Oct 23

Define the earpink. This is really nice! =) 17:47, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks guys :) The Fox Girl (talk) 08:09, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna promote you to an apprentice (that's something I'm allowed to do, according to the guidelines?), since you seem to know what you're doing. 13:25, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded removed a bit of waste and thanks shinx :)

Robinwing (RC) (Star) - For Approval
I like torties :3 15:55, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

I love dem eyes *.* define the earpink some more. I love this. =) 17:46, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

The file should be named Robingwing (RC).star.png, also, can you lighten the chest shading a bit as it's making the white look grey this is beautiful ahh   Brick   The Bite of '87  19:30, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna go ahead and rename this for you, Sziri. ^^ All I had to do was add a space in the file name.

Re-ups Thanks all of you=) 09:48, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the belly. Nice job :) <span style="">3:03 PM, Sun Oct 26, 2014

I think s/he only really needs to define it on the chest and legs- You can see it just fine on the face and tail. This is really pretty, though. 15:57, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks:3 18:52, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ For Approval
this is rubbish. Sooooo rubbish. <span style="">19:33 Thu Oct 23

Lighten up the front paws a bit and the shading. It's fine ^^ Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 19:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks <span style="">19:40 Thu Oct 23

Lol did you forget the earpink? I don't see a trace of it anywhere. 20:00, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

The base color appears to be a little bit darker than her kit and apprentice (both of which I made), so have a screenshot of an unshaded head from the apprentice for the coloring.

Blur the shading some, it looks blotchy. 13:26, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I kinda like this.....I accidently deleted the ear-pink layer before I saved :'D <span style="">16:28 Fri Oct 24

I'd say to add a little more earpink. Its really nice, though ^^ 16:47, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Nah I think she has enough on there. A lot of images have been approved with that type of earpink style. 18:10, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups You saw it when it had been reuploaded, Frosty lmao <span style="">18:19 Sat Oct 25

Define the shading depth a tad, and I think the shading is receding from the lineart in some places. 17:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, changes might be showing, or they could be not. IDK <span style="">17:39 Sun Oct 26

Harespring (Ki) ~ For Approval
Whatever you all do, don't ask me to define the tail shading..x3 lmao. Comments? 20:41, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the patches a little more. They're kinda done in a circular swirling motion.

Re-uploaded. I'm having trouble figuring out the opacity to swirl them on..but I think 60 did the trick. 20:57, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Hmmm... try un-smudging them and swirl them again. This pattern is madness. On the paw one, it's more uneven shaped. <span style="">3:01 PM, Sun Oct 26, 2014

Re-uploaded. Haha I know. Ughh it's so hard to do on this tiny blank, so I hope this matches more. 18:12, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Clear Sky (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Jayce withdrew him, so here he is~ everyone's favorite territory-greedy kitty c: 03:21, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. This is purrty =) 14:06, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 14:23, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (Elder) - For Approval
I do not like these dapples. Dapple matching is pain. Brick  The Bite of '87  12:56, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, as it doesn't really match. I like this. <span style="">14:40 Sun Oct 26

Stoatfur (BS) (Alt A) ~ For Approval
ok lets try this again 22:53, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Quiet Rain (Ancient) - For Approval
…those spots looked a lot more smudged in photoshop… 23:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

they're hard on see on her queen, but she's got a few stripes on her tail, face, and legs (I think for legs) 23:32, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the spots. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:03, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Make the spots more hard-edged. <span style="">0:58 Mon Oct 27