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Unknown Residents Blanks ~ For Approval
These were fun! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:48, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

I'll fix the other image on my next upload and thicken the lineart. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:52, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

On the shorthaired blank, perhaps just round off the tail tip? or make the fur tips on the tailtip pointier, it doesn't look quite right the way it is.

Maybe make the -> front paw a little more pronounced? Not exactly sure on how it would look but I think it should be sticking out a little more at that angle. I'm assuming that it looks the same on the shorthaired blank so fix it on both blanks. 03:37, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Am I the only one who just sees a gray box when it comes to the short-furred blank? (  07:22, 1/07/2018  ) ​

You're not, but i commented saying I'll fix it on my next upload. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:45, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

For the head, can you lengthen the bottom a bit and make more of a mouth, and then the chin? 07:51, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

It's actually the muzzle itself. I just had the cat look down, so the chin, I don't think, is there. It's the top of the muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:55, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart

I think the right (our right) front leg is thinner than the left one. Even them out? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:48, January 11, 2018 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I'll fix the thickened lineart later and add fur to the elbow. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:51, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

is it possible to maybe make the longhair tails a bit fluffier since theyre supposed to be longhaired after all 07:31, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe lengthen the extended paw?

What do you mean lengthen? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 17:44, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Make the leg longer; right now it kind of looks disproportionate. (but that could be just me)

Is the front leg on our right suppose to be bent or straight? I'm thinking bent. If so cats tend to stick their elbows up almost into their ribcage like this. So a cat crouching like that would have the elbow inside the lines that make the body. This would also help with how the leg looks a little shorter than the rest. <span style="">16:35 Tue Jan 16 2018 16:35, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make the back on the long-haired blank more fluffy? 21:06, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Crop the shorthair blank to the lineart (I think the longhair already is) Also there's a line on <- front leg near the head that I don't think is supposed to be there

The right (our right) front leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

I haven't forgotten about this! I shall tweak them on my next upload later! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:14, January 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:32, January 22, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the -> back leg on the short-haired blank more bent than the long-haired blank's? If that's the case, could you make the long-haired blank's leg more like the short-haired blank? 20:43, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

They're the same thing, it's just fluffy on the long-haired blank. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:03, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the line I commented about earlier is still there, so I'll circle it, as well as a few other lines. I can see that the lines are all in the whisker area, but they don't seem to connect anywhere on the head, which is why I think they're out of place, and they aren't on the shorthair, but they don't look like fluff. And finally, the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

the front of the hind leg also looks a little thin around the lineart, as does the all paws. 05:03, January 27, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo had said they were out of town, and experiencing some family issues. I don't think they've returned yet, but even if the Still Working goes by 24 hours, it shouldn't be declined, because it wouldn't be fair to Cosmo if she's not here to work on it. <span style="">02:29, 2/03/2018

Blanks are exempt from the one week/one month ruling. These won't be delcined, and Cosmo came to me and let me know about her activity. These will stay up. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">02:32, 2/03/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

I am home from out of town, but still family issues are going on and now my computer in sai isn't letting me save any files for some reason, even though I shut it down and stuff. I'm still trying to get back on and tweak these blanks, but I'm sorry for the inactivity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

It's all good, Cosmo. Thanks for updating us! <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">03:14, 2/03/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

I should be uploading in the next day or two! Hopefully by saturday or tomorrow night. Sorry about not uploading in a while. Also, i got a new tablet for desktop, so that's good. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:44, February 9, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps thicken the lines on the ears and back a little bit? It might just be my eyes, but it seems a bit thin. <span style="">18:03 Sun Feb 11

Re-uploaded. WOO! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:42, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the lines around -> whiskers/leg look kind of messy on the shorthair, and a little messy on <- whiskers/fluff on longhair. The longhair's tail is at a different angle than the shorthair's, and my only other concern is that the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

Could you make the ears just a little more pointed? 20:58, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

idiot me above said the wrong leg: right (our right) back leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

Russetfur (Alt KP) - CBA
I don't know if I actually like this <span style="">22:48 Wed Feb 21

Very pretty, Sun, but how come you removed her collar? Isn't it a rule that kittypets automatically have a collar unless proven otherwise? <span style="">22:50, 2/21/2018

I don't think so...I can re-add it if I need to. <span style="">22:52 Wed Feb 21

......Can I get this renamed? It says kittypelt instead of kittypet lol. I just noticed that. <span style="">22:53 Wed Feb 21

Define the ear pink and light on the tail. 00:00, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Broken that she should have a collar, unless she was described or depicted without one. Her normal kittypet image has a collar, as does pretty much every other kittypet image excluding the ones of cats depicted in a manga without one. 00:05, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading depth just a bit everywhere but the head and tail? 14:26, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just ended up redoing it. The file name was wrong, and it just looked terrible. <span style="">21:23 Sat Feb 24

Define the shading depth. :) 23:06, February 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">23:23 Sat Feb 24

Comments before approval? 06:29, February 26, 2018 (UTC)

Snowbush (Star) ~ For Approval
<span style="">00:47, 2/22/2018

This looks quite good.^^ Maybe define the ear shading? I may be wrong, mobile makes chararts look a bit off for me.

Re-uploaded. Thank you; I think it may be your device. The shading on both ears are quite visible. I uploaded this version due to waste. <span style="">01:17, 2/22/2018

Alright, it probably is. ^^ 01:20, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit?

I'm not certain about lightening it. The shading's already pretty light as it is, and the visibility of it will decline. Comments from others? <span style="">01:29, 2/22/2018

I will agree that the shading's pretty dark. Maybe smoothing it out will help? 01:36, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

There’s also a speck or two of waste floating above where the tail meets the body on the top^

Re-uploaded. <span style="">01:48, 2/22/2018

I do agree with the others. It seems darker now around the lines and edges. Perhaps just lightening it a bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:58, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That's shading depth. <span style="">02:00, 2/22/2018

I think it could be lightened around the edges a bit. Smooth the shading along the flank? 02:43, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hate shading white cats. <span style="">02:59, 2/22/2018

Could actually be lightened overall a bit more, imo.

Re-uploaded. Ughhhh <span style="">03:16, 2/22/2018

Maybe define the earpink in <-- ear a tad? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:54, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">04:25, 2/22/2018

I think there should be shading in --> ear. Maybe not a lot, but enough to give it a little bit of depth. If there is some there, then my apologies. Long night at work was long.

Re-uploaded. <span style="">17:21, 2/22/2018

Lighten the shading on chin, and smooth shading on the body

He dies??!?!? ;;;;;;;  Might just be my eyes, but the shading on his tailtip seems to be leaking a bit?

Re-uploaded. <span style="">17:30, 2/23/2018

This is really good! Could you maybe smoothen out the shading on the chin, mostly where it connects to the neck, just a bit? 23:04, February 24, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the arms and on the left (our left) shoulder.

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:53, 2/24/2018

Spiderleg (Star) ~ For Approval
Rip Danny. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:54, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

I like the eyes on Spiderleg. Good job! Anywho, there's waste beside --> ear. <span style="">06:30, 2/22/2018

I actually think there's waste all around it. 14:28, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading? This could be my screen because I just got a new one, since i got it its been hard to see shading on black cats. If it is then just ignore this. 15:28, February 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:43, February 26, 2018 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (W) - For Approval
All colors from the softpaw. Shading isn't tinted the same as it is on the softpaw, so it might seem different, but it's not. I just couldn't get the tint to work right for this blank. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">04:24, 2/28/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

There's some waste on the tail. <span style="">04:38, 2/28/2018

Add some shading to the ear closest to us? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:44, February 28, 2018 (UTC)