Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define/darken the shading a little. -- 04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of like the stripes on the white, even if it isn't conventional. There's some blurred lineart on the ear. Define and brighten the earpink.  ❀ wild  heart ❀ 04:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Man HOW do you do that? awesome! But darken the shading. 04:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks :). Comments? Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  17:46, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wow this is awesome work I love it! Yes, I can't see ear pink, can you define it? Leaf-storm,17:49,September 25,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Thanks Leaf ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  18:07, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, I looked on the charart cearfully and I think there can be some more ear pink colour on the white tip of ear. Only a little. It's looking like she have ear only on orange part. Leaf-storm,17:31,September 26,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular too. 23:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 03:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah It's awesome (want help) Leaf-storm,14:18,October 1,2011 (UTC)

Yes, I can't figure out what you mean Leafstorm D:. Itt's just me and my stupidity acting up again xD Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  00:47, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink, make it brighter and more triangular. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * forget it* right? :-) Leaf-storm,9:10,October 2,2011 (UTC)

Shadow (L) - Tweaked
er Comments? 06:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the OA, and what needed to be tweaked? 06:36, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well aren't I smart? :P Shading needs major blurring. Original artist- MosspathOfSkyClan. 06:38, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlight a bit & blur it -- 06:40, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten up said shading a bit? Pretty please? 06:41, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes a tad and blur the haunch highlight. Looks good :3 06:42 Sep 25 Sun

Cutee! Lighten the entire image. 14:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. xD 16:19, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

There are some miscolored pixils inside of her left ear, it'd be our right. 16:31, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:38, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose color. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I thought the nose was supposed to be a darker version of the pelt color. There'a a bit of gray area around her back, so, you may want to get rid of that. =P 22:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I thought so too. Anyways, I think I got the gray. :P 03:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the nose a bit darker? It still seems the same color as the pelt. 00:47, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, you mean lighter? Also, tone down the chest highlight a little bit. 14:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to be a darker color then the pelt. 17:13, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:31, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt colour into the ear a tad so it looks like there's fur sticking up. Looks really good :3 05:48 Sun Oct 2

Silverstream (W)~ Redone
OA was Mintstarr, and this was hardest style to redo. Comments? 19:03, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink & theres this one tiny stripe near the tip of the tail that's too dark & needs blurring -- 19:49, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

The right hindpaw is darker than the others. If it's part of the style lighten it up so that it doesn't look too dark. Much better than mine :P. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:20, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! Maybe darken/redden the earpink a tad? I can barely see it. And in this image her tail-tip is black. It should be made black on her other images. If I were a Warrior, I'd tweak Silverstream's other pics, but I'm an Apprentice *facepalm* I hope I'm nominated in less than 300 centuries :P- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 09:22, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

If you prove yourself, that is :P. Define the earpink. 22:16, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Her other image tail tip is black, no need to tweak, the ear pink is the same as the other image, not tweaking, and ya the other ones dark because of the style. 16:20, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (W) ~ Tweaked


Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?

Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now lighten it and add more shading all around. 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch -- 01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Skywatcher (E) - Tweaked
Okay, original artist was Bramble. He needed scars, but in his description he was also described as having a white-flecked muzzle and a matted pelt, so those elements were added as well. I blended the shading a tad in a few places as it did not touch the lineart. I am hoping to tweak his loner art as well so it will have continuity, but if someone else does it then I'm not going to throw a fit. Anyways, comments for improvement? 18:06, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the arm shading, please. 20:13, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for the delay, I couldn't bring my laptop with me yesterday 21:00, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for commenting after 24 hours, but, the arm shading (again) and the scars need to be blurred. Also, the earpink is the same color as the scars. Can you possibly do something about that? ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:24, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I always thought blurred scars look unnatural (I used the pen tool) and I thought that that is the color of the skin, it would be the same as the earpink. IDK but I will do the arm blurring. I'm going to look that up to see if the scars woudn't be the same color. 22:34, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Birdflight (W) - Redone
I love this, though I loved her old stripes, too. Original artist was Goldenpaw, and the stripes were drawn on unrealistically. 20:00, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The tail stripes need to match, it looks like it was taken from a completly different cat 20:03, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:11, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

<3 20:12, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the tail shading towards the top a bit, because it looks a little flat if anyone knows what I mean. 20:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's a little dark now... 20:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like the way you did the tail. If you think it's too dark, you can lighten it, but it's your choice. 20:49, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened it anyways. 21:06, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple, and more pink/red. 22:35, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It looked fine to me. 23:37, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's a bit oif blurred lineart at the tip of the ear closest to us, but it might just be a bit of the stripes' colour tipping the ear. I dunno. Because it's copyrighted, I couldn't "steal" it onto my desktop and zoom into the ear to check it out in Photoshop.- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 08:27, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's just the stripe colour. I always do that to my tabbies. 17:42, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Kk, Moonleaf. :)- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 03:20, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Other than that, I see nothing wrong. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:22, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't blur it without blurring the stripes (I don't use layers :P), so I just redid the tail shading. 00:48, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Pouncetail (E) - Redone
OA was Flamingomom3, and it needed to be longhaired and needed stripes. Comments? 22:34, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, I like this ^o^ Redden the earpink a smidge and blur the shading along the tail. 22:42, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:15, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the stripes. 23:19, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:21, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ooooooh pretty. *.* The earpink seems the be kind of a funny shape though, could you make it the shape it's supposed to be for elders? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I copied the earpink shape from Poppydawn, so I don't think it looks strange...

Nevermind; I didn't really like the shading so I redid it. 23:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much better than the old one. Love it! CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTS Maybe make the earpink a bit larger, though I'm not sure. There's a bit of blurred lineart on the back-of-neck-attached-to-back sorta place, just above the higher part of ginger fur that was broken in the middle sort of place to let in the white. If that made any sense :P And about half of the lineart tuft of fur in the middle of nowhere on the chest is too light, turned gray by the white around it. I hope I'm making sense. If you don't know what I mean, I'll circle it all in an extra image.- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 08:20, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading on the white a smidge? This is wonderful. 21:17, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:36, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the hue of ginger and the eye color - I thought it was a girl at first. So make it like...non girly. x3 01:47, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading. And, darken/define the shading on the chest. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:20, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (A) - Redone
Comments? It needed to be longhaired. 23:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Icethroat21. 23:45, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Darken the shading a bit and brighten the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:50, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Sky- Killer of Daleks 05:41, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hollowpaw (A) ~ Redone
Redone as longhair, and since it was decided to give him a pale underbelly rather then a white one. OA was Flamingomom3, I believe. Comments? 00:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the stripes and smudge the haunch stripes, and define the ear pink. Y U NO EMAL 2 TO ME??? >:| 00:23, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; it blends in with the pelt too much. Darken the shading, and blur and smudge the part where the pale chest meets the fur. 00:24, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you :3 Icestorm- I did email it to you ._. Changes are in the usual spot. 20:16, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, you didn't >:| Only until you saw the comment did you email it to me. x333 Blur the tail stripes. 20:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, I did. Lol. 20:49, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The eye seems to blend in with the pelt, but that could just be me. 21:18, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? The color or the eye itself? The eye color stands out fine to me. 00:11, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, it's not just you Ivy, I agree. I can barely see them through the pelt. Brighten them a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. 01:55, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes more, please. 01:58, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mudclaw (W) - Re-Done
His mottles didn't look like mottles and he had shading issues, but I ended up re-doing the entire image. Comments? 20:46, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the earpink more triangular. 22:40, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 00:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. 05:54 Sun Oct 2

Russetfur (R) - Tweaked
Awesomee, Imma warrior now which means I can tweak images! Sweet! I added stripes to match the others. OA=Mousetalon -- 22:53, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad I nominated you. Can you make the ear pink bigger though? I can't see it. Also....YOU did this? I'm impressed. 22:58, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ikr? This is beautiful! Redden the earpink a bit as well ;3 23:02, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I dont thinkk I copied the stripes very good though..x[ -- 23:09, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

They look good to me, although you might want to dull them down a tad to match the warrior and deputy images. (Can't wait to put mine up! :D) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 23:20, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

(Me too :D) Can you define the tabby stripes on the back leg farthest from us? 23:42, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Dis better? 23:53, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Wow awesome, define ear-pink Leaf-storm,14:22,October 1,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 14:56, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Dull down the stripes. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, thin them out so they match her warrior and deputy. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:17, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I cant really do anything about the stripes since I forgot to save it layered. Also, this is as dull as it can get. - 22:48, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oohhh....Pretty! :3 Darken the earpink please. This is really good! 09:49, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (L)~ Redone
I tried a new method of shading... Anyway, she needed her shading re-done, and the OA was Dawnfeather. Comments? :3 01:10, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is tweaked, not re-done, right? Looks good. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:11, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the little dot of darker shading where the haunch meets the forearm. Love the color. ^_^ 01:11, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I actually re-did the whole image. 01:31, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I love this image! Brighten the earpink on this > side. 01:45, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gracias. :3 02:18, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

The midrift? shading is darker than the rest. Lighten it please. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:10, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

If you pay attention to angles on a real cat, yes, the shading would be darker, as the light source is farther away and blocked out more. 02:40, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (L)~ Tweaked
Woo, I'm a warrior now, so... I just made his tail longer... it's his namesake you know. I was surprised we hadn't already done it. Original artist was Yai-Girl. Comments? 03:07, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. ^^; Forgot the image limit here was smaller. I'll revert the image myself. 03:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) I think this will be declined, since this is over the limit of 15 images.
 * 2) The tail lineart is too thick, make it thinner.
 * 3) Shorten the tail a bit, I don't think a cat would have a tail that long. 03:10, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you need to credit me for my tweak, as I actually had to redo many parts of it. 03:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine now, Shelly. You can continue the tweak. Just keep this in mind for next time, 'kay? 03:17, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

wait...I though if we were gonna tweak it we were gonna use Vinestar's lineart? - 03:36, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I decided that such a small tweak wasn't worth a complete redo. I can handle the tail. I'll shorten it in a second. 03:48, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made his tail about the same length as Vinestar's and thinned out the lineart. Good? 03:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail tip look more natural. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:09, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

In what way does it look unnatural? 22:29, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks natural. 00:18, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (D) ~ Redone
Wow... I have been wanting to redo this charart for ages. OA was me. The stripes looked all red and weird and the shading was blotchy, so I just decided to re-do it. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:42, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blurr it - 01:43, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing.... - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:49, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it more. 01:58, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:22, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the muzzle and forehead and darken the shading on the ears. Looks good :3 <span style="">04:12 Sun Oct 2

Define ear-pink Leaf-storm,10:36,October 2,2011 (UTC)