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=Tweaking=

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to darken shading, define earpink, and blur facewhite. OA was some crazy person. 23:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and define the shading. 23:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:47, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white on the muzzle some more. 18:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hate the shading with a firey passion. I miss GIMP :( 21:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights(?) and the shading looks flat, try defining it more. 22:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading since they seem blotchy. 00:47 Mon Jul 9

Reuploaded 22:59, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading slimmer, blur it more, darken it, define the white patch, and make the edges smoother. 23:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:08, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks blotchy. Make it smoother and blur it more into the pelt, and make the white patch smoother. 22:23, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, is that^ for the current because the changes aren't showing yet and I redid the shading. 22:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

The changes are showing now. 00:47, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight and there seems to be a "darker strip" on the head, unless it's ment to be there blend it. 03:35, 13, 07, 2012

Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her front leg. 19:34, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach and haunch shading. There's also a strip of shading on the back - blur that, or remove it, since the light source is coming from there. 14:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing yet. 06:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 22:24, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

This could just be me but there is a white pixel on the front left "elbow" (has no idea about anatomy) also lighten the shoulder "highlight" 00:59, 12, 07, 2012

I can see it too. Also, there's an odd strip of unshaded white above that leg. Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Honestly, I think the shading's fine. :/ I fixed that white pixel... And Skt, I don't see any odd strip of shading.. o.o 04:19, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) - Tweaked
Defined the scar, along with a few minorly minor changes. :3 OA's were Evanphoto (I think), minor tweak by Bramble, Cloudy and Rainfacestar. Comments? 07:10, 09, 07, 2012

Could you sharpen the scar a tad? It'll make it more realistic. 18:16, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  o3o I forgot that tool existed changes might not be showing. 06:24, 10, 07, 2012

Can you blur the highlights just a tad? 15:12, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Eh, blur tool doesn't wanna work these days. 01:16, 12, 07, 2012

Define the haunch shading. 21:43, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  03:41, 13, 07, 2012

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded Ikilledit 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't really match. Also lighten it so you can see the lineart, and add/majorly define the shading. 05:38, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading a bit more. Unless changes aren't showing. 01:21, 12, 07, 2012

Leopardfoot (A) - Tweaked
OA was some epical Guildmaster. Added mottles 18:27, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and make it match her warrior? 20:18, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  03:21, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and (I think) make the mottles smaller to match more. 05:50, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded 23:59, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the chest area. 21:43, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:53, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, shading needed defined. I'm thinking the stripes might need to have their opacity lowered a tad to match the loner, but that's for you guys to decide 21:47, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think if you blurred the stripes a little, they'd match just fine. Breeze whisker  00:48, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if changes aren't showing, but I still can't see the shading at all. Could you define it more? 21:36, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ehh I think this is too dark, but if it matches, it matches. I also defined the pale belly since apparently it wasn't light enough D: 04:31, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad more. (And maybe a few more flecks? It's your choice, though.) 17:02, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be mottled. I made him match the alt I made as best as I could, of course not exactly so the pattern could fit the curve of his body. 21:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I know this wasn't why it was up for tweaking, but may you please darken the shading? 22:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make some parts of the mottle more darker. 05:53, 11, 07, 2012

Reuploaded I can't do too much or it won't match  04:32, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading a bit. I still think that some mottles should be darkened, like the ones on his chest. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   18:22, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just darkened it to match the other images. Latest change was made by Misty. Comments? ^^ 00:07, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Misty already did this tweak. It doesn't need to be done again... 01:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Misty's tweak was declined due to the one week limit, but it was never reverted. Cinder, blur the stomach shading, please.

Oh, Ok. I just thought it was approved since it was never reverted. :P Darken the highlights a tad. 04:26, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleclaw what do you mean by darken it? XP Sorry I'm not very good with vocabulary. 19:13, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I believe Paleh means to dull the highlights and blend them in with the pelt more. 01:25, 12, 07, 2012

Re-Uploaded 00:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Willowpelt (Q) - Redone
Trying out a new placement for queen shading... hope this works. Needed to match other images, OA was Twitty. Got the layers from Mounty, so all the colors match. Don't ask me to change them. Comments? 00:25, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you change the light source on the tain to the top so that it matches the rest of the image? Breeze whisker  00:46, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm assuming you mean tail? And the light source is coming from the top left corner. The tail pretty much does match it. The only other place I could put the lighter area, would be on the other side of the tail, which wouldn't match the light source. This is about as close to the "top" of the tail as I can get. 00:56, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, hehe yes, the tail. Then maybe extend the shading a little from the rump on the bottom of it? Breeze whisker  01:04, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - That's the best I can do. 01:12, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her neck and chest. 14:21, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the face and tail shading just a tad? 15:11, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Would rather not blur the face shading, it starts to look messy if it's blurred any more. 00:02, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 01:29, 12, 07, 2012

I think the tail shading's fine. It gives the image some depth.

Rowanfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was Ashshadow I think... Comments? 19:30 Wed Jul 11

Define the ear pink just a bit. Oh, those paws. xD

Can you possibly make him a tiny bit more ginger? It might be Chrome, but he looks a little too reddish-brown. 19:34, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think this shade it fine. o3o oyus the paws  19:37 Wed Jul 11

Yeah, the shade's fine. Isn't this actual ginger anyways? I mean, he's not supposed to be full-on orange or something like that.. xD

What? I thought we were just going to tweak him since only the shading was wrong. Breeze whisker  19:42, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

No. He was still nominated for a redo, provided the style be kept. Which, Mounty has.

Blur the pale and dark ginger transistions. 19:47, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought the pale ginger was fine. o3o 19:51 Wed Jul 11

Yes. In the comments underneath we said he probably could just be tweaked since "there was nothing wrong with the old pattern" and the shading was then really the only thing. >.> Breeze  whisker  19:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but the stripes looked painted on. Regardless, it got three yay votes, and the pattern is the same, save for the pale ginger parts, which I've got no issues with.

This was more current than the nomination. I would think it would be the one that we would go with, regardless of what went on during the nomination. Especially since the stripes look no more painted on than many of the rest of the tabby chararts. Breeze whisker  20:04, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

The nomination was valid, for whatever reason. There's no need to renominate an image that already passed the voting for a redo. Just because an image is declined, does not mean we need to renominate.

Edit conflict darn you. Anyway, only one person suggested a tweak while four people voted on a nomination that is still in effect. And it was more than just stripes. With the shading and color it would have been simpler to just redo it. 20:14 Wed Jul 11

Re-uploaded Redid it to match the kittypet <3 22:39 Wed Jul 11

Blur the neck shading. <3 Skt Omnia vincit amor 22:45, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:52 Wed Jul 11

Lighten the shading in between the back and stomach. Beautiful C: 22:58, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies 8D 23:26 Wed Jul 11

Blur the shading on the top of his haunch. 00:54, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This is as blurred as I can get it. ono 03:21 Fri Jul 13

Birchstar (RC) (L) - Tweaked
Needed to be light brown, and needed a shading tweak. I just took the image before it was tweaked, lightened it, and put a new layer of shading over that, cause it was much easier. Also added some depth to the eyes. OA was Splook with a tweak by Thistleshine. Comments? 05:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her chest and tail, and make the earpink less purple and more natural. 18:55, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It seem to blend in with the stripes. 21:45, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Instead of darkening the shading, I suggest darkening the stripes; in some parts they're indistinguishable from the base colour. But maybe just define the shading on the tail a little ^^; 00:53, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Rather not darken the stripes. I rather like the lighter stripes, and I don't exactly know how you'd expect me to darken just the stripes anyways. 0.o But it others agree, I'll change them. 05:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. The stripes in certian places (Like the chest fur and <--- that side haunch) you can´t really see them, if at all. Also darken the shading a tad. This is wonderful. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   18:25, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Redone
OA of the most recent version was Mooneh, and others include myself and Elo. The entire image had issues. I really like this image, and I'd rather not change the stripes.

Smexxy <3 Blur the stripes just a smidge. 06:00, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I love the stripe pattern ^^ Can you define the shading on the haunch and tail? 16:23, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) ~ Redone
OA of the most recent version is Mooneh, and was originally done by Colleen. ( I miss her, btw ) Stripes are matched to the warrior the best I can, and both sets of colors are the same, so don't ask me to change them.

Can you define the shading on his face? 16:13, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine.

Birdy (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading and made it whiter dodge tool ilu  OA was Padfoot. Comments? 03:17 Fri Jul 13

Can you blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? 16:21, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

It looks too white. Tone it down a tad. 17:04, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Alt.Ki) ~ Tweaked
The shading needed to be darkened. Most recent OA was me. Comments? 14:05, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Tweaked
needed shading darkened. original artist was Shelly. Comments? 14:25, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) - Tweaked
same as warrior. changes aren't showing. Comments? 14:26, July 13, 2012 (UTC)