Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 212

Lulu (KP) - Approved
ok im not exactly proud of this rip had to rush this too cuz man senior year sucks. side note: did her bc of her name. 02:42, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the --> back leg 03:30, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the white muzzle more creamier? She's not listed to have white. 04:34, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

while you're add it could you add shadow to the chest? don't think there should be light there

reup 05:21, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved

Dawn of the Clans Pale gray kit (Star) ~ Approved
00:54, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shading a tad? 11:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 19:04, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved

CP Dark-colored StarClan (star) - Approved
comments? the starclan blank is my favourite to shade tbh 23:16 Sat Mar 2 2019

Should it be a tad darker, if called dark? Malina457 (talk) 01:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

could you very very slightly define the depth? 03:44, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I colourpickedfrom the manga image so the colours would be true - so might I ask for a second opinion? Will reupload shortly for shading depth though 07:12 Sun Mar 3 2019

reuploaded 07:29 Sun Mar 3 2019

CBA?

Approved

Swiftstar (WC) (L) ~ Approved
I heard that if they're leaders/KPs you can do two so here we go! Shading's hard on this blank...

Very good Warriorcat! Just add some depth to the shading and blend the earpink.Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:52, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Instead of blurring the earpink, you might be better of smudging just a tiny bit instead 04:28 Sun Feb 17 2019

Sorry but I cant find your light source..? -- 04:40, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

hm i believe its coming from the left 05:55, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

sorry for the double comment but you named the file wrong, it should be File:Swiftstar (WC).leader.png -- 06:00, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is the left, do I need to emphasize that? Also before I do anything to the image, is there a way to rename a file on here or do I need to upload a new one? (You know what I made that exact spelling error at least ten times last night...)

You can overwrite the misnamed file (if you use GIMP or a similar program) by clicking a button called "Overwrite existing file" with the correct name and that should fix it. Also yes define the light source.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:00, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

If your shading is coming from the left, I'd suggest removing the section of shading you have on that side of the neck, that might be what it throwing your source. When you reupload the image, instead of doing it over this one, reuploaded over the one that Silv linked and replace it here. Also might I suggest adding some depth to the shading too? 20:26 Sun Feb 17 2019

Reuploaded I ended up blurring it bc smudging is hard on paint.net. Also I don't really know what it means to add depth to shading so I hope this is better...? 21:37, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Adding depth to the shading is practically defining it. For blurring, try using GIMP (it's free). There are many ways you can blur, such as with Gaussian Blur (tho it may mess up the lineart) or running the dodge tool over where you need to blur. You can pick any brush to help you with blurring. You could also use to opacity bar to adjust the shading. The file name is still incorrect, you are missing the t in Swiftstar. Excuse the wall of text. (P.S you can smudge the shading too)Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:57, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

I'm very sorry, I'm an idiot--i fixed it and reuploaded under the correct file name but didn't change the file name in this page... RIP I'm smart. Okay, now try.... 02:14, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I'm a little confused, is there still any criticism now that I've uploaded the correct image...? 01:36, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

You ask for comments after three days have passed. Could you smooth out the shading a little on the legs?

There's also shading leaking on the <--- haunch, parts of the tail, <--- front leg, and chest (red). And the <--- ear pink (blue) appears to be leaking as well. 23:20, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry... I was hoping to appear smarter now than when I was 11... RIP. Honestly I should've waited given how long it was before I had a chance to upload but, alas... I did what I could with the shading, turns out paint.NET's smudge tool is actually useless for minor tweaks--or I just have no idea how to use it. Could go either way. 03:21, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a little bit on the chest, tail and neck? There appears to be some sharp spots there. Add a tad of shading to his right ear too. I can't tell if there's some shading leaking on the <--haunch? 15:52, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

i think the earpink is leaking a little from the edges? Whiskii ✿ 14:03, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be expanded and defined a little more. 23:03, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded At this point Idek if this is better or not. Dang solids are harder than I remember... 01:25, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart between the legs, and it could stand to be smoothed out everywhere

Reuploaded I did it and it took awhile but I did it and I'm happy 04:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved