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Rockfall (Star)- Declined
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink into the pelt, it looks like it cuts off very abruptly. 23:07, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

I think you could smooth out the shading on the main body and tail more. also, the shading is leaking on the legs. (Remember to blur the edges of the shading only so that it doesn't end up leaking)

The shading is leaking on the chest and where the tail-tip is over the body as well. Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 14:01, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Please reupload under File:Rockfall.star.png from now on, thank you. I've renamed it for you, but for future reference, please remember the naming guidelines that we have. They can be found above the reservation table on the main page.

Yep, I'm still working, I was out of town for a long time, so i had no accsess to my computer.

Reups.

The shading looks a little flat imo, and the fur needs to be smudged into the fur a bit. —   Fla      me    I can and I will  22:35, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Oops wrong file.Reuploaded.

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 23:53, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Can you Blur and lighten the shading more, the eyes are very nice. Belllastar (talk) 22:39, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Extending allowed deadline to December the 23rd due to image being more than 50% complete. 09:54, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks very blotchy. Try blurring the shading with a hard-edged blur tool at the rate of 100, rather than using gaussian blur.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  14:00, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Define the shading deapth in the face (everywere actully) and smudge the earpink a lot more. Are gray cats supposed to have dark noses? The shading is also extreamly blotchy on the tail and it is also leaking. 04:39, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

How do you define shading deapth and yes gray cats always have dark noses as seen on here.

The apprentice image has a pink nose. Please color pick from that, as that is the image you have to match. To define the shading depth, add a new layer of thinner, darker shading to make it less flat. I still say the shading needs to be blurred a lot more.

Reuploaded.

I really hate to make you repeatedly do the same thing, but the shading really could be blurred more on the main body. Use a size 10 blur tool, make it hard-edged (by ticking the box in the window), and at a rate of 100, blur the edges only (so that it doesn't leak). The other problem is that the shading on the face and ==> leg is leaking away from the linear art. When you blur your shading, blur the edges only to prevent such from happening. To fix the leaking shading, add a new layer, and add shading to the parts where the leakage is happening. I can see that you're getting there. ^.^

Reups.

Blur the shading on the main body just a tad more. 15:17, December 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

I still think you could blur it more.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  05:24, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

OMG this is so beautiful! Maybe add a little light to the tail, otherwise this should be placed on his article <3 .incandescentflame (talk) 05:27, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Smoothen out the shading on the main body and tail? 20:34, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Declined due to the 1 month limit.

the tail looks too big

It's gotta match the blank, Coffee Lover. And this image is already declined, so there is no need for commentary. 06:15, December 26, 2015 (UTC)

Mothflight (Queen) - For Approval
I am horribal at shading, but i'll fix it later Belllastar (talk) 16:19, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

You didnt reserve this. Also proper file naming and spelling are part of the rules. Please follow them. If you do get to keep this image, define shading depth and your light source. And don't align your images. 16:30, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Umm.. your not a senoir warrior, I tryed to spell it right but I make mistakes. I'm kind of new to the project (I already said the shadings bad i might redo it) (I unalign it) Belllastar (talk) 22:36, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

You forgot a date on the reservation. Again, if you do get to keep it I don't think the eye colour matches. Either that or lighten the shading and/or the green 00:12, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I know I'm not, but you need to follow the rules, Bella. Please use proper spelling and grammar. Just because you're new to the project is not an excuse to misspell words. You can use spellcheck. This file needs to be renamed File:Mothflight.queen.png 00:22, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I renamed the file for you. Please remember to use proper grammar and follow the rules. 01:48, December 16, 2015 (UTC)\

I'm sorry if I was a little rude, I was just really just tired (the eyes are color picked from her warrior image, and I don't use shading.) Belllastar (talk) 03:59, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

If you don't use shading then how are you shading your image? Whatever it is, it should be smoothed out and defined. 04:08 Wed Dec 16

It doesn't match the rest of the her images though. I think you should colour pick from something which has larger eyes (say, the ES or her StarClan image). 04:29, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

nah, I'm sure Bella is telling the truth. I think it matches enough- the only problem with the image right now is only that the shading is overblurred and undefined. Perhaps try to erase some of the shading where it wouldn't be needed, then run the blur tool over the edges carefully? 13:24, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  13:57, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:14, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 14:16, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

Yes I have a week full of tests so I have been busy can I upload tomorrow?

You have until the end of day tomorrow (22 December) to upload. If you don't, then it'll need to be declined, as per PCA's rules.

REups tryed to fix shading, I think I will redo it though --Belllastar (talk) 18:56, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should get rid of the eyelashes since the blanks don't have eyelashes anymore. 23:46, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined more.-- 23:48, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, chest, and tail. Also, define the shading depth a little. 23:54, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the eyelashes. 02:02, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Try not to use pure white as the base (unless the base is acctullly pure white) but it just seems to bright. 16:01, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Pure white as a base is perfectly acceptable. I use pure white all the time (and none of my cats have anything but pure white as their base), as do many other users. Saying "try not to use pure white" gives off the air that using pure white is forbidden, when it's very much not. I actually think it's not too bright at all.

oh. ok. Well could you darken and define the shading? I can't see it on my computer. 20:33, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Fox (DTC) (ES) - Declined
it's been a while since I've posted something here — b  eau  Finders  Keepers 03:51 Wed Dec 16

Blur the texture a bit. 04:16, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded — b  eau  Finders  Keepers 04:47 Wed Dec 16

If the light source is coming from somewhere by the top left corner shouldn't the whole chest be in shadow, or is that just me? Nice, by the way 04:59, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Fox is a little more.... Red? 06:28, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

On his description, though, it states he is a 'large brown tom.' 08:22, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think the rogue came first so shouldn't his tone match that? 10:19, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I figured that as well, but then shouldn't the Starclan also be brown? The Starclan looks more reddish to me. 01:27, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the facial shading just a little?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  13:58, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but i cant really see the ear pink on the ear closest to me. I'm not sure if its just my computer.

Still working? 07:49 Thu Dec 24

Declined due to lack of work.

Frost (ES) - CBA
I'll probably redo the texture since it looks really bad, I just wanted to get this up while I can. 00:47, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

shading should be expanded, and I think the texture should be a bit fainter. 16:09, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:16, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the back leg a bit? 22:21 Sun Dec 20

Re-uploaded. 22:46, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could smooth it out more, it looks hard-edged.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  03:27, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:54, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Stagleap (GC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I tried to match it. I really did. 14:37 Sat Dec 19

Define the shading and make the earpink larger. 14:55, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker on the warrior. 14:59, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Where the light is coming from? Also stripes... they shouldn't be horizontal. They should be perpendicular to his back, directed towards belly. <font color="#9facf4">S <font color="#90b0f0">i <font color="#80b4ec">l <font color="#71b9e9">v <font color="#61bde5">e <font color="#52c1e1">r <font color="#54c7df">t <font color="#55cddd">w <font color="#57d2da">i <font color="#58d8d8">g  15:02, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

The source is over -->, and a bit downwards. To me the shading seems very dark... Could I have a second opinion on that? (I'll fix the stripes and earpink soon) <span style="">20:51 Sat Dec 19

Maybe not necessarily darkened but I think it could be thickened. <span style="">21:36 Sat Dec 19

Smooth out the shading by whatever means you pick; I don't care if you smudge or blur it, tbh.

The stripes on the warrior are going in one direction; towards the stomach. Could you tweak it so the stripes run towards the belly? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  12:46, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thickened and reorientated stripes, defined and smudged shading, and enlarged earpink. <span style="">22:27 Mon Dec 21

The earpink should be enlarged more. <span style="">04:45 Tue Dec 22

That's the earpink style I'm using, it's supposed to be small. It's very similarly sized on the warrior image. <span style="">19:02 Tue Dec 22

earpink size and shape doesnt have to match. I think it should be enlarged too. 16:03, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *holds up hands in defeat* I've been outvoted. More realistic this way anyway. <span style="">4:04 Thu Dec 24

The way your shading is it seems like there's blurred lineart and the light source isn't exactly realistic. Could you switch the shading down near the paws and expand it some more? 15:08, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

this is so osm!

The stripes don't seem to match the warrior very well. On the warrior, the stripes are kind of broken up and are arranged in a more orderly pattern.

Dew (ES)- For Approval
<font color="#9facf4">S <font color="#90b0f0">i <font color="#80b4ec">l <font color="#71b9e9">v <font color="#61bde5">e <font color="#52c1e1">r <font color="#54c7df">t <font color="#55cddd">w <font color="#57d2da">i <font color="#58d8d8">g  15:04, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail, and please do not align your images. 14:23, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the eyelashes- we are no longer using different blanks for different genders.

Could you fix the pupils it looks as though there are none. -- 00:28, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think eyes are artist's choice. Do you mind smoothing out the main body shading just a bit as well? <span style="">04:43 Tue Dec 22

We no longer use eyelashes to define gender. Could you remove them? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:30, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

omg this is osm!---coffeelover

Coffeelover, compliments are nice, but they are considered as spam. Please do not make a comment if you do not offer any critique.

Blue Whisker (Alt. Q) ~ For Approval


Also, I know there's waste. I'll get rid of it.

smudge the tail and back leg/that area around the base of her tail so it isn't as hard edged. 10:44, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Killed all the waste too.

This is amazing! Are the gray streaks on her chest texture or shading? Either way, it could be smoothed out/smudged a tad.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  03:11, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much :) It's texture.

Remove the eyelashes, we don't need them anymore. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:29, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded i thought i removed them... :/

Blue Whisker (Ki) ~ For Approval
shulk from nintendo (thanks for uploading for me David) <span style="">14:05 Sun Dec 20

For reference, the base color is #ffd25a, the stripes are #d19d11 on multiply. The legs have a pale color (#ffedd0). There are two layers of texture. (#deb74e on multiply and #f1e1b6 on screen) I think you matched this pretty well.

Define the main body shading and the facial shading. 14:21, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Pearnose (MCA) ~ For Approval
Comments? 10:31, December 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading some? 17:31, December 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups  23:52, December 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Removed eyelashes 00:58, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

define shading on the herbs. nice! 16:04, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:48, December 26, 2015 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (Ki) ~ For Approval
^.^ <span style="">14:39 Mon Dec 21

There's white waste around the right side.

Define the shading everywhere?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  03:28, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

reup <span style="">12:42 Tue Dec 22

reup Changed the shading tint to match ES. <span style="">14:34 Thu Dec 24

Mud Paws (ES) - For Approval
I used highlights for the first time in like four years <span style="">21:42 Mon Dec 21

Smudge the earpink and define the shading. 02:19, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think the highlights could be dulled down or smoothed out much more- right now it makes him look shiny, like he was made out of plastic. 06:12, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

define shading on the tail. There is extra waste between his upper neck part and the whiskers. 16:06, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. how's this? I lowered the highlight opacity quite a bit. <span style="">07:54 Thu Dec 24

Dapplepelt (ES) ~ CBA
Lemme try this again. 22:15, December 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:18, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

The white's looking gray on the tail. <span style="">04:56 Tue Dec 22

it's going to look grey, it's in shadow. 06:52, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 16:47, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I understand that it's in the shadow. If that's the case, why do we tweak images all the time for the white being gray? I can see that it was lightened a bit since the last reupload, and I think it looks fine now. <span style="">17:39 Tue Dec 22

It's been three days without any further comments, so I'm gonna go ahead and put a CBA on this lovely image. <span style="">18:00 Fri Dec 25

Spider Paw (Ki) ~ For Approval
14:10, December 22, 2015 (UTC

Is there a way you can represent his extra toe? -- 18:59, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I tried, but with the size of the paw it's near impossible, sorry. It just looked silly. 21:23, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine don't worry -- 23:20, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Instead of a lineart change, maybe try shaping the toes with shading? That way, it would be easier to define that extra toe feature. I'm sure you could ask jayie for tips, considering she does that on a majority of her chararts. 21:48, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

I've tried doing what Jayie does with the toes before, but that ended in disaster. Is it really necessary? Besides, the early settler's extra toe is on the left side of the (our) left paw - on this blank, with the paw angle, it's going to look too awkward. 00:00, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

whiskers and such weren't edited on featherwhisker and such because there was no lineart for it, I think the same applies here. (to the toes obviously) 00:01, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

If there's no lineart, then it's not necessary unless you're feeling up to it. If you've already tried and couldn't get anywhere, then it's fine as it is. We didn't add anything to Featherwhisker's kit, so we can use the same logic here.

Okay I've been sitting at my computer for the last hour trying to do something with that toe, but nothing's working out, so I don't think I can do anything with it. 14:38, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, please.

Mouse (MFV) (Rogue) - For Evaluation
This is my first character art! I know it probably needs work.

-- 15:16, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I renamed the file for you. Make sure to upload it under Mouse (MFV).rogue.png whenever you do changes. Also, define the shading and make the graying muzzle more visible. 15:39, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload fixed shading and added grading muzzle

Define shading depth and remove the waste(on his back) 16:05, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload cleaned up lineart and attempted to define shading depth.

Define the shading on the legs,and i think you could darken it a bit 17:30, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Don't forget to sign your signature. Blur the transition from highlight to pelt, and add some more depth to the shading as well. <span style="">17:37 Tue Dec 22

'Reupload ' I cleaned it up a bit -- 18:31, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out here http://www.ezimba.com/work/151223C/ezimba11233719670500.png and define tail shading 18:43, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload  I fixed what was said. -- 18:55, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define light on the legs? <span style="">19:04 Tue Dec 22

Reupload I defined the light on the legs but if I did it any lighter it would not be brown. -- 23:49, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the light could be defined more on the legs. Also, blur the main body shading. 22:59, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload added more light to legs and blurred body -- 23:49, December 22, 2015 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images, please.

Sorry I never knew -- 05:17, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some light to the back leg furthest away from us?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  05:21, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't meant to be any? -- 05:31, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

This looks really nice! Could you define the shading on the tail a little? <span style="">05:23 Wed Dec 23

Reupload defined shading, changed to full size and added some light to backleg -- 05:37, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! Add light to the leg furthest away from us. 06:11, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload fixed light issue with back leg-- 06:44, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks over blurred. Also, define the shading on the legs closest to us a blur it slightly more on the ones farthest from us. the tail shading could be smoothed out as well. 15:58, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I defined shading but I don't see how it is over blurred. -- 17:16, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a lot more.

Reupload tried to smooth it but if I smooth it out to much I lose the shading. -- 11:13, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

Please reupload under File:Mouse (MFV).rogue.png. This is the only file that can be used once it gets approved, and you were already asked once about using the proper file name.

Reupload I apologise but I made a mistake no need to get angry, I'm new. -- 21:48, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not angry. I'm just telling you that you were already asked before about the proper file name. Define the shading too.

Needlepaw (A) ~ For Approval
i'll probably alter that shading later 22:39, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded tweaked it 22:53, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the chest shading? 01:56, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:19, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Red Claw (ES) - For Approval
All colors from the loner and rogue.

Robinwing (Star) - For Approval
15:04, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a bit?

with the eye style you're going for, I think the white that surrounds a cat eye would probably be visible. your choice though. 17:17, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:49, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

the eyes look strange can u fix that

no, they don't. and leave a signature when you comment. 06:02, December 26, 2015 (UTC)

how do u do that???---coffeelover

To sign, place 4 "~"s after you comment.

Could you smooth out the transition from shading to pelt a little more? This looks lovely. <span style="">08:18 Sat Dec 26