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Nutwhisker (K) For Evaluation
I color picked from the kit but used the warrior as a reference. I also probably have to fix the shading and everything because I did this at 1am when my brain doesn’t work--​ 22:08, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Sharpen the texture a lot more. I'd recommend asking Finch for the warrior's file, I feel tht will help a bit. -- 22:29, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Actually, the texture could almost stay as is considering the original kit was first in the set, followed by the apprentice (which also has a softer texture than the redone warrior). Maybe smudge the earpink a little more for now?

Reuploaded  I already redid the texture, I softened the ear pink too--​ 22:51, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture, I do believe you oversmudged it. -- 22:52, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded texture--​ 23:06, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looked a little to light so I darkened it--​ 23:17, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. way down  hadestown    |undefined    01:44, 1/22/2020 ​

Reup-- ​ 02:03, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

add shading to the chin. 03:26, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

I’m not sure how to do that--​ 04:01, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Grab your paintbrush/pencil tool and trace over that area; then smudge/blur and you should have some lovely shading over there. -- 04:04, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup is this what you meant?--​ 04:52, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Yeah, but I can barely see it. Darken it? 15:38, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Reup-​ 21:58, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. -- 00:58, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture a little bit? Looking at the original kit, I feel like the texture lines should be a bit thicker than you have them as well. 03:15, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Reup--​ 15:20, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading overall. way down  hadestown    |undefined    01:38, 1/24/2020 ​

Reup-​ 19:23, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

I believe the texture should have a shaper appearance - slightly; it appears more blurred out here than on the other images.

Reup—​ 03:30, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Smudge the texture a bit. -- 03:31, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reup wow Potato that was quick —​ 03:40, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

yes i fast Add more shading to the tail. -- 14:00, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reupyeet—​ 15:52, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Add more shading along <<< this side of the tail. -- 16:39, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit too, if you don't mind. It seems fairly blotching. ​​

Reup --​ 18:32, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

Reup sry Jayce I just saw your comment. I forgot to save the shading laste time so I had to redo it...--​ 18:34, January 28, 2020 (UTC)

About my comment right above this, it was the textured I had to redo because I forgot to save it, not the shading--​ 00:22, January 29, 2020 (UTC)

Texture’s looking a tad too sharp, mind smudging it a bit? way down  hadestown    |undefined    04:13, 1/29/2020 ​

Reup I had to go so I couldn’t say reup right when I reuped it—​ 02:17, January 30, 2020 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the base colour a little bit? This looks darker than the apprentice.

Reup—​ 19:31, February 2, 2020 (UTC)

I feel like the texture lines should be slightly thinner. ​

Sorry Jayce but that’s as thin as my tools go, my computer is broke so I have to use my tablet.--​ 19:12, February 4, 2020 (UTC)

Also, that tool is 1px, the same size as the line art pixels, it should be good.--​ 23:18, February 5, 2020 (UTC)

I agree with Jayce, the texture needs to be thinned. If you have an eraser, use a 1px size and erase some of the texture, then resmudge it. -- 23:33, February 5, 2020 (UTC)

Reup-- 02:37, February 6, 2020 (UTC)

Can you add some shading in the ear? 04:03, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup— 14:17, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I decided to redo the shading because I really want to show the progress I’ve made. Blurred shading is pretty hard for me and I think this looks better anyways.-- 16:36, February 12, 2020 (UTC)

Orange kittypet (K) ~ For Evaluation
The shading and back stripe are confusing, yes. I'll fix after comments 23:00, February 8, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out shading?--​​​ 13:23, February 9, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but the eyes look more orange than yellow. 14:51, February 9, 2020 (UTC)

The paw pad closest to the tongue appears to be unfilled. -- 20:12, February 9, 2020 (UTC)

To expand I what I said, I can’t determine the light source either. Add depth on the shading as well as smooth it out and expand it--​​ 00:48, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reup I think I need help with the light source. I know there's waste but I'll fix it later. 10:21, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Hmm.. smooth out the shading a bit. Also, (I think this is correct) there would no shading on the back. -- 02:26, February 13, 2020 (UTC)

That’s supposed to be a stripe, I’ll get the manga image when I get home-- 19:32, February 13, 2020 (UTC)

Black kittypet - For Approval
All colors from the manga. This was more pain that it should have been. -- 21:31, February 9, 2020 (UTC)

I believe this was short-haired in the manga? 04:10, February 10, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 02:24, February 13, 2020 (UTC)

Wasptail (w) ~ For Approval
03:04, February 10, 2020 (UTC)