Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

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=Images Pending Approval=

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Applefur (W) ~ For Approval
Ah, what a fresh new day in PCA. Comments? 00:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe sharpen the mottles on her midriff? 00:34, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Icy on this one. Perhaps make them slightly less like texture as well?

re-up I tried (remember this is my first mottle) ;__; 00:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the mottles just a bit more? They kind of look like texture or highlights at the moment. ( teach me how to mottle this is hawt ) 13:37 Sat May 17

re-up 13:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) ~ For Approval
Still going with 'er. Comments? 00:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail, leg and belly shading a touch? Dazzling, as always with Beebs's chararts c: 00:14, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 00:20, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Can you blur the brown spot on her tail? And possible define the shading that goes from her shoulders downwards. Very pretty. 00:35, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 00:41, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The brown spot could be blurred a teensy bit moer at the base. 00:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up It's actually the tail shading, but close enough? 00:46, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Looks pretty accurate comparing to her warrior image. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:48, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Willow (Ki) ~ For Approval
she's cute; I am so happy 00:08, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her right arm and her stomach (or blur it, whatever looks better) and possibly the shading on her forehead. 00:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval
here we are 00:08, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading 00:32, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Star) - For Approval
RIP my darling, for I think you were killed far too early for my liking. All colors are from her other images.

Maybe add some depth to her non shaded parts? 00:31, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Don't know if this is helpful or not, but I'd maybe lighten up the eyes a little, perhaps? eek i'm not good at critique i'm sorry   notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

What do you mean? I don't normally use highlights, Icy, and I'd rather not add any for this one. Any other alternative suggestions? Should I define the shading or something like that instead? As for the eyes, they're colorpicked from her other images.

Sorry I'm terrible at explaining but like, maybe define the shading is probably a better word for it. 00:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Okay I wasn't sure sorry notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I goofed up on this...

I think it looks pretty accurate. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  14:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Star) ~ For Approval
Richard Nixon. 00:38, 17, 05, 2014

Possibly blur the spots on her flank a bit more? Looks nice. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thank you friend 8D 00:47, 17, 05, 2014

Good! notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC) I can't think of much else, anyone got something I'm missing?

Could you define the head shading just a bit? Jeez, her pattern is madness.

Lizardstripe (Star) ~ For Approval
heres a lazily done lizardstripe 01:52, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur her pattern some more. 11:52, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I think both are fine. The pattern appears to be the same as her other images, so it's fine. The shading appears to be fine, as well. 13:35 Sat May 17

Eh, maybe just the shading on --> paw could be defined a bit.

Shimmerpelt (Queen) - For Approval
Wow, I've wanted to redo this for a while and I'm not happy about the tail..

Possibly lighten shading and/or highlight a bit? I'm having trouble seeing the lineart. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  14:45, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The pelt color is straight from her other images, and because she's described as night-black, I'd prefer to keep her this dark if no one minds? Of course, I'll gladly change it if others disgree with me.

Ashfoot (Queen) - For Approval
First charart of approval started.. Sorry I don't know what I said. Anyway this is my first charart for approval, comments? :D -- Night Wolfy Moon  02:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur and add more depth to the shading. It looks quite flat. Love those eyes <3> 2:35 Sat May 17

Re-uploaded I made the shading a bit darker too. And thank you. The eyes are always my specialty :D -- Night Wolfy Moon   12:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Try defining the shading around the belly, it still looks a bit flat. Trunktail 15:50, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Tom (KP) ~ For Approval
Here's Tom. Not exactly my favorite character. Comments? 03:10, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading a bit, but they do look pretty neat.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 03:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and darken it a bit.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 16:28, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Emberkit (DotC) (StarClan Kit) - For Approval
Not sure if I'm doing this right, but I drew Emberkit. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 03:57, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Woah, this is good for a first charart! The stripes seem to fade into the shading. Maybe define 'em some more? 03:59, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The file name should be File:Emberkit (DotC).star.png. Would you like me to rename it for you? All you'd have to do is continue reuploading under the renamed file, since we have naming conversions that we use here with our various images and templates and pages and such. This is amazing, Jayfrost!

Thanks Bbunlegs. :) I darkened the stripes a bit, hopefully they're more defined now. And thanks Snowed Lightning. I uploded it with a new image, and I followed the naming thing this time. I'll try to remember that. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I just realized I only tacked on the .star bit, I forgot the rest of the changes. Um. Sorry about that. Would you mind changing it? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. Just continue to reupload under the file I've named for you and you'll be good to go!

Thanks. :) Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:10, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

His chest is supposed to be white, correct? Is there any way you could make it more white? If not, that's okay with me. As for the eyes, I can't quite see where the whites are supposed to be..unless that's just me being blind. I'm sorry I'm being nitpicky- this is a wonderful image for your first charart on here.

I made the white on the chest and the white in the eyes stand out a bit more. Is that better? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:32, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Mmhmm. That looks quite a bit better to me. I'm really impressed with this so I'm gonna change the heading to "For Approval" and promote you to apprentice, since it's completely obvious you already know what you're doing.

Oh, wow. Thanks! :D Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:38, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Looks really good, Jay! Possibly define the eye color a bit more, I'm not sure it it's just me, but the color looks a bit flat. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  14:34, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Edited, tried to make the eye color stand out a bit more. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 15:31, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The "black" part of the eye could be darker. 15:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Edited, tried to make the pupil stand out more. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 16:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Frog (Cat) (Ki) - For Approval
My first character art in a while, this time of Frog. Comments? Trunktail (talk) 13:18, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Removed thumbnail. The title should also be either 'Frog (Cat) (Ki) - For Approval' or 'For Evaluation' ( sorry its late and I'm not sure ) Anyway, I can't see a real light source, so define it, perhaps. This is really neat! c: 13:44 Sat May 17

Re-Uploaded. Is this better? <font color="34282C">Trunktail 14:14, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Frog (Cat).kit.png. Would you like me to rename it for you?

Yes please :3 <font color="34282C">Trunktail 15:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. There you go! Maybe define the tail shading a teeny bit?

Re-uploaded. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 15:48, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (W) ~ For Approval
nyan nyan <span style="">15:21 Sat May 17

Maybe lighten the shading a bit? Also, she looks a bit pupil-less, unless that was intentional? Other than that I can't see any problems with it. -- <font color="34282C">Trunktail 15:47, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Shading darkness is artist's choice, unless it's too light.

I'd also rather nor change the eyes. That's how I do them. <span style="">16:17 Sat May 17

Meadowslip (Q) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">16:23, 05/17/2014

Define the foreleg shading. 16:24, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reups. Defined the shading on her tail, too. <span style="">16:40, 05/17/2014

Whitethroat (Star) - For Approval
I'm not sure about how good this is, the earpink took FOREVER to get shaped right, any comments/questions/ideas? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:16, May 17, 2014 (UTC) (yay, first charart in 3 years!)

Define the shading and eye depth, as well as add some white to his chest. 17:18, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (Star) ~ For Approval
I'm not proud of this the shading is bothering me. But I did remove the waste, changes are just being a pain in the butt. 17:17, May 17, 2014 (UTC)