Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes and make the ear-pink a bit redder 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The furry effect needs to be smudged an blurred, and perhaps lightened. It looks like tabby stripes on the brown. 06:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't smudge it, because it's smudged to the limit; but it has been blurred. The earpink will remain untouched, since it's from the warrior. 16:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brown's too dark and the furry texture still looks like stripes. 00:30, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Which brown? The main one, or the texture brown? 18:17, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

I believe she is talking about the main brown. 00:29, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

I got the main brown from the image, but I'll fix the fur texture in a little while. 19:10, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:19, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

The brown in general looks much too dark. It looks near black. Lighten it. 01:13, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture a little bit more, and erase some so that more of the base white is visiable~ 01:58, 30, 06, 2012

Perhaps remove a little bit of it, like stated above, but make it more transparent as well to give the shaded look. 17:25, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:18, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase some of the texture on parts that are highlighted more. Like, erase it a lot, so that only a little is showing. It will add a lot more depth and shading. Breeze whisker  17:42, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded After messing with it for awhile, I think I got what you were saying 8D. 23:33, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still seems kinda flat...try and define it, please.

Reuploaded The chest shading looks like the way it does because of the texture... o3o. 00:01, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

She kind of looks like she's squinting because of her eyes..17:07, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:40, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. It just looks....weird. 23:50, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine. Skt Omnia vincit amor  00:02, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

The fur texture doesn't really match the warrior's. Could you fix that? =3 00:13, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more and the brown still doesn't match. 05:19, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Ki) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading. Changes might not be showing, and I personally believe it could be blended a bit more. x3 OA was Sunleap. Comments? 06:54, 28, 06, 2012

I believe someone forgot to add it when they put this on the tweaks needing to be done list, but this also needed to be darkened to match her other images. also, dull the highlights. 11:21, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Yeah I'm not very fond of this image. :P 06:05, 29, 06, 2012

Can you make the earpink less red and more pink? 00:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I took the color off the warrior image now. 03:01, 30, 06, 2012

Blur the shading some more some more, or lighten it. Breeze whisker  17:39, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Urgh, that shading. 07:48, 02, 07, 2012

Can you define the shading just a tad? 15:40, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Waste is a lie. 03:24, 04, 07, 2012

Blur the highlights. 21:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  01:48, 05, 07, 2012

Darken it more. 10:27, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (KP) - Tweaked
What's this? A tweak I haven't failed epicly at? It can't be! But it is. Anyways, this is Sol and all I did was add mottles, but I don't think the changes are showing. The OA was Iceheart Darkhallows, I think. Comments? 11:56, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the orange less.. eye-burn-y? 21:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

How? 00:19, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

I believe Loonie means to make the orangle less saturated and reddish. ouo 03:34, 30, 06, 2012

Still working on this? 00:01, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I'm sorry for not updating. GIMP's being a real pain to me but it should be updated tomorrow. 20:59, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Got the file. The orange looks odd. 21:11, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Eh I changed the mottles. 21:13, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mottles a smidge. :3 01:56, 05, 07, 2012

Re-Uploaded: 02:12, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) - Tweaked
She needed to be brought back to the color she was before to match her other images, and actually be dark cream. I need to fix some shading, I know. I'll do that in the next upload. Breeze whisker  21:26, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, define it, and make it more triangular. 22:16, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe tinge the shading browner/redder. She looks kinda ashy/gray. 00:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. (Yes, the highlights are tinted green.) Breeze  whisker  00:56, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the base just a tad? It doesn't quite match the other two images.

Make the earpink more triangular and a tad smaller. 01:03, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/redden the ear-pink 03:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's all I'm going to do with the earpink. Breeze whisker  17:37, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and perhaps make it thinner around the back area. 21:01, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading along her back looks fine...but maybe define the shading on her legs a tad? 01:18, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Needed ragged fur (Changes may not be showing yet) Ohgawd I killed it Comments? 01:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. -- 16:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the ragged-ness? O_o Maybe make it match her queen? 16:22, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, wouldn't her fur be a bit more ragged as both a loner and rogue, probably from the fighting, and all of that?

True, but I think it could be toned down just a tad. XD Skt Omnia vincit amor 20:18, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 04:47, 01, 07, 2012

Blur the tail shading. Nice job, Stoner. 21:00, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Wait - should I tone down the furriness or not? I dunno...but I kinda think that the queen has a little bit of raggedness... 23:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know, but it makes more sense for her to be fluffier when she's outside a Clan and doesn't care about her appearance. I think it should stay... 23:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should tone it down just a tad. Yes she'd be more ragged outside the Clan, but this is going a bit overboard. 22:10, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dark (TB) ~ Redone
My first charart is redone~ 8D Back into doing chararts now, wee. I think I made him too dark (and not because his name is Dark, Loonie D:<), but I'll just wait for some input. Comments or concerns anyone? owo 20:58, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mud o3o 21:01, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the base pelt color a tad so the shading stands out. 21:24, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Great job, Splashy. Lighten the ear-pink and add more mud streaks. 20:58, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I couldn't add many more mudstreaks without him looking like he has brown patches. 03:57, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color. 04:02, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 19:00, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define and blur the shading? 15:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the mud? 15:20, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 23:42, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Ok, before anyone says anything, the original shading on Cinderpelt's first kit made the new shading really hard to blur, so I just redid it all together. Recent OA was Iceheart. 15:09, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry...but It was nominated for a tweak, the vote passed, and so it should be a tweak.... *shrug* 17:40, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I got permission from a SW before I redid it (Trolleh.) But if it needs to be tweaked, then I'll simply tweak it. 18:34, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, if you had permission, I guess. 18:33, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken, thicken, and blur the shading. Blur the ear-pink. Excellent job, though. 20:56, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are not showing, but if they are the older image doesn't look scaled. 19:16, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and define the rest. (If I am looking at the correct version) 01:50, 03, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 22:28, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs and tail. 03:25 Thu Jul 5

Cody (KP) ~ Tweaked
I swear on my life this is tweaked. I magicwanded the stripes and put them on a different layer then filled the space in on the base coat and then lightened it. I smudged, darkened and thickened the stripes and defined the shading (it disappeared and the eyes kinda did too (smart me)). So yeah x.x;; (don't kill me) comments? 06:43 Tue Jul 3

Make the stripes thinner. 15:24, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink match the queen. 16:50, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Point the stripes a touch 01:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and make them more blackish. 03:55, 04, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded 23:01 Wed Jul 4

Ratscar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
All I did was add the torn ear and scar, of which came from the warrior. OA was Silver. Comments?  11:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and make it more pinkish? It looks gray right now. 15:36, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:53, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to complain about something that you just fixed, but could you redden the earpink? It looks too pale to me.... but the rest of this image is positively beautiful, really! :) 00:01, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

If it gets anymore red then it will be hard to see against the base coat. I think it's fine. 03:24 Thu Jul 5

Re-uploaded Thickened the scar...I thought it didn't match the warrior's very well o3o <span style="border: 2px solid violet; border-top-left-radius:2ex; border-bottom-left-radius:2ex; border-top-right-radius:2ex; border-bottom-right-radius:2ex;"> 11:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be longhaired. Sorry I just realized a small part got cut off. Don't worry, Ivypool is next. Low battery, sorry. 21:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on her chest. 22:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Her tail looks sorta flat...could you define/remove some shading...or add a "highlight"? OwO 22:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the body shading. <span style="">03:59, 04, 07, 2012

I say while this is up, the ear-pink closest to us should be blurred a bit, (Unless its my lap top). -- 08:57, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random black dot on her right paw... 00:02, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

That random black dot is lineart. However it does seem to be too thick. <span style="">02:15, 05, 07, 2012

Ivypool (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked for jacked up ears and a shading tweak. I hate how the new shading looks, she looks silver now. I might redo the ears and everything when I get ahold of my flashdrive. Meh. 21:43, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a bit?

There's some waste leaking out of the ears. 22:19, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading. 22:19, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ro) - Tweaked
OA was Paleh, and she needed to be... floofy? I dunno. Ohgawd why do I fail so much. 22:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

If we decided that the loners ragged fur had to be toned down, then this should probably too. o3o <span style="">02:19, 05, 07, 2012

Cloud (Storm) (KM) - Tweaked
- Shading needed to be defines, color needed to be more white, and because I have the layers I colorized the mud to make it more brown. :3 23:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the mud spots a bit? 23:39, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink 01:15, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 03:22, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:34, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the mud a bit more... texturised? owo So it doesn't look like she's got brown patches. (Couldjust be me) <span style="">04:13, 04, 07, 2012

Reuploaded. 00:12, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Twist (R) ~ Tweaked
The most recent OA was some sexy person. 8D I just had to tweak the facial stripes and I wanted to saturate the ginger some more. x3 04:30, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

can you make the ginger more gingery? It looks brown ._. 04:58, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes on her face just a tiinnny bit? And maybe define the orange brown markings, (Unless its the lighting on my lap top). Looks Epic! :3 08:52, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt.D) ~ Tweaked
Just redid the shading and the earpink got messed up, so that too. OA was me. 16:13, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. 23:03 Wed Jul 4

Blur it too. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:25, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined and blurred the shading. 04:04, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (W) - Tweaked
Darkened the shading. Most recent OA was Cinder 17:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Pinenose (Q) ~ Redone
Orders were to kill, so that I did. OA was Leafstrike.

I didn't see anything wrong with the old image... ah well. Remove the tiny white dot by her rump? 02:47, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

It had major shading issues, and I don't think there was a light source. And that white dot is part of the lineart. o.O

Would you consider adding highlights, or maybe lightening the base colour? Because it doesn't quite match her warrior. 02:59, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There are highlights. I just failed at using them. I lightened the base color for you, though.

Sol (Ki) - Redone
Needed to be mottled, needed to match other images better, and shading was blotchy. OA was Purplemoon. Comments? 10:43, July 5, 2012 (UTC)