Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Pebble That Rolls Down Mountain (Ki) ~ Tweaked
tweaked to lighten gray —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    21:36, December 17, 2018 (UTC) 

Lower the opacity of the shading a few ticks, this is lovely.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:48, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

It's suppose to only be tweaked for shading, I can't lower the opacity. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:48, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

I do actually agree, the shading is a bit dark. I'm also not seeing any difference between this version and the previous version. Are you sure you uploaded the right thing? ​​​​​​

I believe I did, I can check in a bit on it. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   04:50, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

I second Jayce. There's barely any difference between the two uploads. 00:39, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

I know, I'm going to upload it soon. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:11, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:26, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

The shading looks a little flat.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:47, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

I mean, it looks fine to me though. It has depth and what not. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:48, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading. ​​​

Lineart is slightly blurred (or appears to be) on the bottom of the back paw and on the > side just perpendicular to the mouth lines 00:49, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:01, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading a lot more, because they're still looking really blotchy. ​​​

Re-ups, hopefully this looks better. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:35, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

It still looks blotchy imo ;; Maybe gaussian blur it? —

Re-Ups —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   07:30, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink seems oddly two toned in a sharp way, could you fix that? 18:41, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you meam, the link you sent took me to an empty upload page. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   21:18, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I tried to fix it but there it is —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 00:18, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Dovewing (A) ~ Redone
got permission to redo, per same reasons as the kit 20:51, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

I think the haunch and tail shading could be defined some. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   06:34, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:44, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MCA) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sorrelflower. Tweaked to remove pale parts. 21:08, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

I know this isn't what it's up for, but since it is, would you mind adding some shading on the legs/paws? Looking at it, there appears to be almost none, when this source would call for some 18:45, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 21:38, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Sunkit (Ki) ~ Redone
he we go, this one makes me much happier. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   21:12, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

Whiten the white. I think you forgot to fill in the nose, and some chest white is leaking onto --> that leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:04, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

The white is at 100%, with shading and texture on it as well as the white is suppose to be on that leg. That's the design. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   23:37, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

I agree it looks cream, not white. Try and remove/lighten some of the texture (not all of it)

Re-ups —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   05:30, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the back and > leg 18:42, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 00:21, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Sandynose (Lo) - Redone
that moment u realize u put the shading on same layer as the base :<

21:46, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

Could you dedine the tail shading? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   13:06, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Dovewing (W) ~ Redone
got permission to redo, per same reasons as the kit 03:50, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading and define the earpink a bit more. —

Reuploaded 14:46, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) ~ Tweaked
Huge thanks to Vec for helping me with this ;; Tweaked to remove pale parts. —

No problem! This looks amazing for your first tweak! :D The ---> section of the tail tip looks a little out of place from the rest of the pattern. Think you color picked too close to the pale part for that section imo. Mind color picking from a bit further down? 06:01, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded —

You forgot to fill in some berries.Potato Flakin (talk) 14:10, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

All of them look filled in, as blue? Just checked, unless I'm really missing something 18:43, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Em, there are two gray berries and another berry near the leaf that's gray-green.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:13, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I didn't touch the berries at all. I can show you my layers - I made sure the berries and leaf weren't touched. —

I think that’s just how Echo depicted the berries, rather than them not being filled in. 20:17, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lied, some waste got onto one of the berries. Potato, I tweaked this image by just purely removing the paler parts from Cinderpelt's original MC art, I purely worked on only those areas and the tweak page is for critiquing the tweaks, not the image as a whole most of the time. The OA was in charge of the berries, not me. —

Oh, my apologies! Won't happen again.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:54, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (K) ~ Tweaked
OA was Dazzle. Tweaked to remove pale parts. 22:35, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I know this wasn't what it what posted for, but define the shading on the legs.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:17, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 05:12, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Star) ~ Tweaked
Removed pale parts uwu —

Can you define the shading on the ---> front leg? It's very flat atm. Nicely done! 05:54, December 22, 2018 (UTC)