Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Nutmeg (Ro) (Ro) ~ Redone
OA was Ravensong, redone to match the queen and the shaidng needed tweaking. Comments? 07:50 Mon Sep 17

The shading needs blurring and it shouldn't have a reddish tint. 02:37, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

The patches still aren't smudged the same direction. Also add a little more white to the tail tip. Not much though. Maybe a couple pixels wide.

The smudges almost look pixily, or not exactly pixily but look...computerish? (it makes no sense, I fail at explaining). Play around with your smudge settings, get a feel for it and try different techniques and it should come out natural looking. 05:53, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I suggest finding a reference picture to help you with how the way the fur naturally runs, usually helps me :) -- 06:19, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Bah, I'm withdrawing. 11:41 Wed Sep 19

I'll take over. 19:24, 19, 09, 2012

Re-uploaded Bleg I fails >.< 23:12, 20, 09, 2012

It is not a fail! Blur the shading on the belly a bit and darken the tail shading  23:34, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded akfjsdtgkmas 18:11, 23, 09, 2012

Blur the shading on the hind leg closest to us a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  Why can't it be October 7th already?  00:06, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine honestly. 09:02, September 26, 2012 (UTC)

Runningbrook (W) - Redone
Redone to match apprentice. 20:21, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

So sexy! Define/enlarge the ear-pink just a touch. And it might just be my poor eyesight, but is there a bit of waste on the top of the muzzle. 21:01, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Might be my screen but it looks like there are a few miscolored pixels at the top of her head. This is so sexy! -steals and runs away- Pad  foot Mischief Managed 00:16, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see them. 01:03, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. As far as I could tell, there wasn't any waste or pixels. 16:29, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes seem much darker and more defined on this than the apprentice. Semxy though.<3 18:36, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the ear pink just a smidge more? This is beautiful, Breezey. I adore it. <33

Ferncloud (A) - Redone
Well, I tried... Redone to match her other images 02:29, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add darker flecks in, make them all less uniform, darken the stripes a bit, lighten the base coat and blur the shading. 18:19, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:48, September 26, 2012 (UTC)

She still doesn't quite match... 09:01, September 26, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes on her back legs really don't match. If this makes sense, they should be facing upwards. xP  09:08 Wed Sep 26

Owlclaw (W) ~ Redone
OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Leafstorm. Comments? At Paleh's request, I tried to keep the stripe style the same, but slightly tweaked it.

I love this, it's so pretty! Can you enlarge the earpink? 01:16, September 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Duck~

He's sexyyyy..... Lighten the shading on the tail a touch and brighten the ear-pink. And maybe add a few more thin stripes (just an opinion) 01:49, September 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes, he is sexy. I fixed everything but the stripes. I think they're fine. 8D I want to keep this as close to the original pattern as possible.

Oh my, I just love how you did the stripes<3 Can you define the shading just a tad? 14:19, September 26, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you I think the shading's defined enough, though. You know the deal, though. Ask, and I'll do it.

Soot (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and I darkened the image and redid the shading.

Rock (H) ~ Tweaked
Look at dat creepy cat. XD OA was Flamingomom3 with a tweak by Shelly. Added scars. c: 01:57, September 26, 2012 (UTC)