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Echosong (loner) ~ For Approval
yeah i dont like this --

I think it’s good! Could you define the shading, though? 23:29, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

The stripes on the legs could be smudged out more, and maybe have one or two more stripes on the haunch that go more diagonally between the ones that go just downwards and just > way. iirc also the muzzle should be pale and the stripes go lightly over the chest, to match the other images

Re-uploaded sorry school's been beating me up with a stick and i had no motivation to do anything other than play animal crossing and make plans to overthrow the admins on the wiki discord in my downtime --

oh noes. also, the stripes on the flank could still fill more space (see starclan version) and could you define/darken the shading?

Cobweb (GC) - For Approval
I'm gonna mess with the colors and shading. Just wanted to get this posted. 15:22 Fri Jun 22

Reuploaded 15:52 Fri Jun 22

Again I can't get it to look how I want -___- 16:56 Fri Jun 22

Could you lighten the texture just a little? It seems a little rough, in some parts? It could just be me though. But I am the Chosen One 16:57, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shoulder shading.

The shading looks a little flat. Could you add more depth? This is nice, though! 20:56, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid it (again). The pale is light silver, not white btw 00:42 Sun Jun 24

I know you said it isn't white, but could you dull it down just a bit more? 02:02, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Feather (GC) - CBA
this shading i hate it 20:08, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading just a bit.

maybe expand the shading slightly as well? 23:52, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:17, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the belly and shoulder shading.

Reuploaded I tried. 22:03, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 02:18, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Peanut (GC) ~ For Approval
pfft i spent an hour and a half trying to shade this, i might redo the shading. love the new blanks though! 00:56, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Add the herbs, as she's a healer. 01:55, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the back leg some? But I am the Chosen One 20:34, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tried fixing the shading a little. 00:35, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

There should be some smaller patches on the main body. The biggest patch should be slightly smaller. And I think the patches could be smudged more. I smudged it across the entire pattern if that makes sense.

Re-uploaded. does this look better? 21:33, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, a lot. Just smudge the yellow more on the front legs and it's good to go.

Re-uploaded. 05:12, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (GC) - For Approval


22:17, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Define the ear pink; I can't see any at all.

The tear is on the wrong ear. 00:42, 6/25/2018

Perhaps add some shading behind the head? 07:33, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 22:15, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Define the facial shading. Specifically on the cheeks and neck.

Could you try to define the ear pink some more? It's still hard-to-see. 02:00, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 23:02, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

I don't think you really... did what my comment said. To illustrate what I meant, I highlighted the parts you need to add/define shading with red, and the parts you need to remove with blue. http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2dcd7vo&s=9#.WzV17rT5ixI

Also, you overly defined the shading everywhere else. The previous image had satisfactory shading depth in parts that weren't the face, tbh.

Spiresight (GC) - CBA
this took like forever to finish, rip because GIMP wanted to crash But I am the Chosen One 17:12, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is great c: 03:55, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups also thanks But I am the Chosen One 05:57, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Did you add the texture? With as dark as this is, it's pretty hard to see. If you did, lighten the base a tad so we can tell what's what. For reference, the StarClan image is the first in this set.

Re-Ups, yeah there is texture. But I am the Chosen One 19:54, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 00:49, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Dotty (GC) - For Evaluation
I have no clue how to reserve images or even join... help? Like I added my name to the reservation table, but does that count. I tried Malina457 (talk) 01:54, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Soften the edges around the stripes. Define the shading depth. There is waste all around the image, please erase it. Good job on this! :) 03:53, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I see some foot waste, but other than that, I think I got it? Thanks btw :) Malina457 (talk) 04:47, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups Waste be gone, I think Malina457 (talk) 04:50, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

There is still some waste on the other edge of the image, left of the elbow on the front leg closest to us. Please smooth out the shading. 04:59, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I think I got the waste? It's being very elusive, and I tried with the shading Malina457 (talk) 05:32, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the shading on the tail, chest, and ---> front leg. Very nice! Waaaay better than my first image. 07:32, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

You still missed the waste. It’s in the same spot, plus behind the tail and behind the back leg. I can try to circle it in red and show you, if you need? 13:43, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Can you please circle it, I did try XD I will uploading soon Malina457 (talk) 13:46, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I literally can't see the waste at all, anywhere, not in my program or on the wiki, it's being very elusive XD. Also thanks Vec :) Malina457 (talk) 14:08, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the tail shading, define the eye depth, and maybe add some shading along the top of the > ear since it looks slightly flat^^ gg for your first one

Reups Better? Malina457 (talk) 14:50, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth the shading everywhere. 22:04, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Malina457 (talk) 22:14, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I think the shading could be smoothed on the tail a little bit. Define the shading on the face too. 21:35, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Malina457 (talk) 23:23, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I’m sorry, but there is still waste. It’s everywhere, around the whole image. Some close to the lineart, some totally far away. Could you just erase everything outside of the lineart on the shading layers? I tried to make a redline for you but I couldn’t. Sorry to keep bringing it up, but there’s a ton there. 23:33, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

I can't see anything, can I get a second opinion as I've tried so hard to find it Malina457 (talk) 23:40, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups?? Malina457 (talk) 23:44, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The waste still there in several places, namely: under the tail, top of the tail, on the backside, and up onto the tail's < side, elbow and along the leg, between the legs and up along the chest to the chin, ear, and tail tip; hope this helps you find it.

I'll get right to it, thanks so much! Malina457 (talk) 01:55, June 28, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth the shading on the tail and legs. 01:59, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I cant really smooth the shading more there without it needing to be defined again Malina457 (talk) 02:12, June 28, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reups again Malina457 (talk) 02:23, June 28, 2018 (UTC)malina

Actually, I think it wouldn't hurt to smooth the shading on the hind leg and tail a little more; it still seems kind of hard-edged there and I don't think doing so would make the shading difficult to see. I also think you should expand the shading on the tail a bit. 00:15, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reups How's this? Malina457 (talk) 01:08, June 29, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Cinderheart (Alt A) ~ For Approval
Since nobody took this image when my reservation ran out, I believe I can post this now? (finally back home with wifi, thank goodness) I renewed my reservation.

Define the shading depth just a little bit? 22:36, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sigh, not a fan of this image

Define the shading, and also the depth a bit more. Smooth the shading on the tail. I think it’s a good image C: 22:37, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 谢谢 :]

Maybe smooth the shading on the tail a little more (the upper part, near the tip)? This is really pretty. 00:09, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Ivy. Is this any better?

Marigold (GC) - For Approval
I officially dislike doing black cat chararts, but it’s whatever. :P This file is titled correctly, right? 21:34, June 28, 2018 (UTC)