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Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg

as a head's up, go ahead and start matching the pale blue-gray shade you see in the old one's prior revisions, we're swapping her and Mistystar to be pale due to a LS cite, per PC

'''Reuploaded! ''' Is this the right one? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  23:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add just a little more light to the muzzle, specifically on << side of the face, as its in more light?

With your source, I think the top part of your >tail wohld be in light as it has shading on too to bottom and that doesn't make since with the source so if you could fix that  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:45, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little light to the top of the paws 04:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There are also three pixels of waste between the hind paw and the front <--- paw. 22:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading depth to the haunch, it still comes off as flat-ish imo compared to the rest of the image

Still working?

14:32, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Yes sorry i just finished finals!! I'll upload asap -Shadow   hOnK :o)  04:21, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

There's three pixels of waste underneath the tail, and could you maybe define the earpink? 22:47, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch; there's a couple places where it's still pretty saturated 17:35, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  05:01, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more.

can you define the eye depth? 02:15 Wed Jun 12

Dsfine the light source in the < ear  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more  Ellie  life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened the shading depth  21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg

Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat?

Reuploaded  16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.

Reuploaded  23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit.

14:38, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:48, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some light to the chest and legs, add some depth so it doesn't seem flat like it is on the legs and chest area  Ellie  life is an illusion 15:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll add light to the chest and shading depth, but Mink, this is the exact same way the legs are on the source I mentioned above, with the exception of the bounce light. 16:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did the things I mentoned. 16:06, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still looks flat, and should also be made to curve on the face instead of go in a line straight down. Also, same comment for the earpink color as on the kit

I get there shouldn't be light down there since I've used this source before, but it shouldn't look so flat as it is does. There should be depth. Adding some shading light should help add depth to the lighter parts of the shading there as well as some darker bits, like Blackstar has. The haunch is also leaking  Ellie  life is an illusion 17:51, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the light source to Bouncefire's.  20:42, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch could be swooped downward to encompass the curve (basically putting the shading on the lower haunch and connecting it), and removing some from the tail tip because there wouldn't be as much. 21:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:25, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, it should be on the bottom of the tail, iirc.  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:01, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire's source has the shading on top of the tail, not the bottom. 14:06, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire is a tabby, its not seen as prominent as this. As some others have probably said. One shading on another character might not work for another. The source contradicts the shading on the tail, it should be on the bottom as its inconsistent with it on the top. It doesn't make sense when the light is coming from > and the shading is where there should be light.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:55, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The shading can also be smoothed, too. 21:11, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploadeddddd again fixing a few things. 22:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

that bit thats still on the top should be curveddown as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded herpaderpderp  22:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

That's not what I meant, I'll give a redline inna minute. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

here, this is basically what im getting from you shading source so i did a redline. As well as fixing that, lighten and smooth your shading. It could use quite a bit of smoothing <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:25, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the tint to blue. I like this one better. 00:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Curve up the haunch shading so it shows off the shape of the thigh. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded rip I tried  01:07, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the line of shading going across the thigh. I think what Mink was referring to was curving the shading downward to encompass the bottom of the thigh. And smooth the shading, too. 01:10, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think the best way for the shading to go is to have a look at the updated shading chart, as it shows the two most common sources that users have been using for the warrior blanks + kits.

Reuploaded double rip, matched to tutorials. 02:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the over all shading a bit, then on the back line art the shading is very faint, define that? 15:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

That spot of shading still looks fairly light compared with the rest of the shading, making it look inconsistent. Could you make it match in depth more? I think the depth could be defined on both front legs and the face - perhaps expand it to go under the chin? Smooth it by the bend in the tail, it looks blotchy, and the haunch and shoulder shading could be smoothed some more as well. 23:45, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix the shading more tomorrow. 01:28, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the haunch shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:41, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:10, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the back and blur the transition more 23:12, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:19, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste by the back paws and >> ear; and I also think the shading should be smoothed.

Reuploaded tried using a pressured opacity smudge brush  20:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is a little bit blotchy at the top of the flank <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 09:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:37, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still very blotchy on the flank, shoulder, haunch and tail. 19:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded what even is that shoulder shading anymore. 20:14, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still appears to be blotchy in the areas Vec mentioned. Could you expand the shading more on the haunch and define it in the ears? 02:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:09, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

SkyClan's Destiny gray she-cat (W) ~ For Approval
My first canon charart. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 07:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading please? also there was a thumb on your image so i removed it :)

10:32, June 15, 2019 (UTC) whoops sorry for the double comment. the eyelashes should be removed as they are not in use to define gender anymore

10:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Soften up the texture a bit to match her kittypet. Good work! 13:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 13:46, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumb the image by going into source mode and removing the |left. Make the pupils less of a square, add eyeshine, and define the shading on the hind feet. 14:11, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Changed the heading from approval to evaluation since you're still a kit^^ Smooth the shading on the legs and flank, and there appears to be shading leaking from the chest and leg farthest from us, then add some to the ears. Nice job on this! 14:31, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes look like there's still lashes, that part shouldn't be there iirc <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:10, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 08:27, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the < front leg to remove the blotchiness, and you've got some waste outside the back

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:16, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, the back paw farthest from us would have some shading, though not completely in shadow. 20:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The eye color also seems different than the kittypet. Nice job doing the texture btw! 00:39, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 14:41, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and darken everywhere 23:34, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

There would be a little shading under the jaw with this source, and define the shading on the hind paw farthest from us. This may just be my screen, but there might be waste under the paws. 01:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 18:47, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

There is a lot of waste everywhere around her, so please remove that. Can you expand the face shading a bit to touch the eye and jaw, and a touch on the front leg closest to us? 22:05, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 09:25, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the front leg furthest to us :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:33, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking a tiny bit on the back. 15:21, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the face and shoulder a bit. Could you possibly expand the shading to go under the chin some? It looks rather flat around there and I think adding some shade will help. 02:06, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 08:21, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Bumped you up to apprentice, keep up the good work! Mind defining the shading on the < front leg?

reuploaded. Thank you, spookywilloww! <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 20:04, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on --> foreleg, and maybe add a little bit more to the shoulder just to round it out? Looks a little mishapen. 00:44, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 14:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (Ki) - For Approval
I think it's fine if I pick this back up? if its not lmk. I kind of stopped working bc i got sick and its hard for me to draw when I'm sick.. I still kind of am, but i'm feeling far better and so I created this demon. This time I got the original file for the kit. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste above the back <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:38, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups wasteus deletus <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up. Perhaps reupload again? 01:07, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

It's now showing up. 01:31, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add some more brown spots near the shoulder, just looking at the Hunter's side for reference.

Still working?

mhm im reupping when I get to the computer tonight <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:09, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

reups <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up again. Try reuploading once more? 02:01, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt W) - For Approval
oa claim, used vecs deputy file for everything <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:32, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

This looks good! There should be white on the belly and the stripes should be a bit more jagged and not a linear. What I did is use a small brush and brush tightly up and down across the blank. 16:08, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

mhm, trying to make it look good still. seeing how ive used sai for years youd have though id know how to do this decently, ill just reup whatever i land up with tomorrow and work more  <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays  <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 03:04, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
tried to copy the deputy and old warrior's pattern but uhhh.. idrk what i did lmao

15:36, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the patches on the other images seem more sharply smudged than these; these appear a bit softer on the edges

Reuploaded 13:53, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a touch more 23:09, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Reuploaded Yeah, I was on vacation. 14:27, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Ki) - For Approval
<span style="">16:34 Wed Jun 19

Can you define the shading overall, and smooth out the tail shading? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:45, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

In addition to Jose's comments, might you also expand the shading as well? I understand if that's just part of your source, though.

Still working?

Duskpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
oa claim from spooky

12:02, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

The colors look very different from the apprentice, and the stripes look more sharply jagged. 17:13, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

18:00, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

I think, to match the app, the haunch stripes could be a little thinner and more broken up as they go to the >> side of the cat

Would you like the file for the apprentice? 18:14, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

That would be great, blue! just send it to aritariusworks@gmail.com 14:27, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) - For Approval
Fluffy girl  22:10, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the overall shading, and define it on the ears and upper head?

Reuploaded  22:30, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 17:57, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:55, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading a little above the rectangle shading piece on the forleg so it connects to the shoulder/upper forearm shading some more? Seems very abrupt atm 21:18, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:48, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Very nice! I feel that the shading by the bend of the tail could be removed, so then you'd just have the patch of shading on the bottom, then one by the base. Not sure, it just looks off to me? Smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us, on the bottom of the tail, chest, and a bit on the haunch. 02:12, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:26, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading/smooth it out please 05:44, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:46, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

looking good, its nice to see how much you've improved in a short amount of time :) could you smooth the shading out a bit more on the chest, it looks prety hard edged there 02:39, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt! 23:27, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Furzepelt (W) - CBA
furzestar 2020 <span style="">23:32 Thu Jun 20

CBA?

Sorry to break, but I can't really see the light source on this one. It seems like the shading just traces the whole image.

reuploaded changed the shading style, the paintbrush style wasnt working with this image <span style="">21:01 Sun Jun 23

The gray looks just slightly darker than it did on the old warrior/current app

reuploaded yeah when i originally colorpicked it, you could barely tell it apart from the pelt so i darkened it a little. so maybe this is better? <span style="">18:56 Mon Jun 24

Re-CBA? 02:44, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Fernshade (W) - For Approval
I don't know which was harder: Berrynose, Dapplenose, or this. Tried to colorpick from the StarClan image. And before anyone says something, the "white" isn't white, it's a light creamy-gray. 23:34, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

this is really good!! can you smudge out the two brown spots on the tail so they're not so hard edged? and perhaps darkening the body shading a little wouldn't hurt either <span style="">23:35 Thu Jun 20

Reuploaded x2 because SAI hates me again. Hope I got the spots you meant! 23:42, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add just a little bit of black to the top of the back leg? The queen looks as though it has some there - this is absolutely gorgeous by the way, good job matching!

Reuploaded. Thank you ;w; 18:00, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

It might just be my eyes, but I think the colors appear duller on the other images? 19:09, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened just a touch. Also messed with shading. 20:10, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

For lack of better words, I feel the patches of colors are sharper on the other images, whereas they seem smoothed out here

Reuploaded. I tried. 18:30, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

The paler parts look a bit more creamier on the other images? Ignore if that's the color you got from them, but I wanna make sure. 15:53, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked from the Star, but I’ll go compare it to the other images as well. 16:26, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Went and colorpicked from the original warrior for the near-white. 16:40, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Evaluation
Haven't been here for a while! :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png) 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left.

Reuploaded~ :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears? 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:29, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Blend the texture in the shading more. Flip the shading on < this ear to the other side, to comply with your light source. Can you also smooth out the shading as well? To soften it up and make it more of a gradient. 02:38, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  04:15, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 15:37, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

This might be a repeat of the comment above, but maybe define the shading placement? Especially on the flank, upper shoulder and chest area. Right now it looks like it's all over the place atm. 00:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, tail, and front legs. The shading on the back also appears to be leaking, and the shading, over all, could be smoothed. 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Much better! Swap the shading on the bend of the tail to the top to comply with your source. 00:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded like this? :P <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  ''<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:17, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Fuzzypelt (W) - For Approval
Love this guy. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:36, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry to break the CBA, but, could you add some shading underneath some of the fluffy bits of fur so they don't appear so flat? (Similar to Brokenstar's leader and other fluffy cats)

Ferretclaw (W) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:36, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a bit? 21:19, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps desaturate the tint a touch as well? It's making parts of his gray look dark blue, to the point where it's distracting. 18:21, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Replaced it, still not too satisfied. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

It's still a bit sharp on the top part (our view) and bend of the tail - could you smooth it there?

Flintfang (W) - CBA
Realized just how light the shading looks outside of SAI so I'll go darken that in a bit. 18:49, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:10, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Might you define the head/facial shading/ear shading a little bit?

Reuploaded. 18:59, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

This is a very minor thing, but, maybe add more light to his eyes? Looking at the StarClan image for reference, they just look a lot lighter than what you've got here.

Reuploaded. 14:42, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Appledusk (W) - CBA
-points- hate this guy  01:36, June 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you use the color from File:Appledusk.Icon.png, please? That’s what we agreed on.

i did. it's color picked from that image 03:24, June 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Huh, weird. My phone must be having issues. Could you smooth out the shading a bit?

I think it’s the shading tint - the former images were altered to icon cause they were pretty green and the tint here appears so too. While technically not a requirement, would you mind dulling that slightly?

reuploaded changed the shading to black 16:35, June 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Smooth the shading a bit on the belly, haunch, and tail? 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 16:55, June 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA?

Brindleface (W) ~ CBA


There's some waste floating around the chin, back, tail, and paws. 03:33, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

I think there should be a few more flecks throughout the pelt and the darker Y stripe on the flank and another in the middle of the haunch should be a bit smoother. 00:50, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Didn't add too many flecks bc the star's side doesn't have many

CBA? 02:33, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Foxleap (K) ~ CBA
Not too sure about the colors. 03:43, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reups changed the colors to match the star since that was easier to colorpick from. 17:57, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:45, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Birdflight (W) - CBA
05:41, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

I'm comparing the colors with this, the old warrior, and the StarClan image... and I'm not sure if it's because of the lighting differences, but this one seems slightly different than what her other images are. It's mainly the face, really...but this could also be my laptop- I did just try and tweak the color calibrations yesterday.

reup i tried changing the base but it didnt do anything, so i made the shading black and darkened the stripes 09:52, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? You did a great job matching the stripes! 02:33, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Eaglestorm (W) - For Approval
ugh, I tried my best. Thank you so much Eggheart for helping me with the texture. 16:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe add some shading and/or texture to the > front paw? 22:07, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add more shading to >>> this side of the tail, and some depth to the back paws? 22:08, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - The shading looks really dark here? 18:04, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Idk but this seems a shade darker than the old image - a combo of shading, base etc. might be doing it, I'm not sure

Deerdapple (W) ~ CBA
16:55, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you either darken the tint or the shading some? 19:11, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:26, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Finchflight (W) ~ CBA
is only image in set, Skye said I could redo patterning, since had been theirs.

CBA? 02:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Firefern (K) - CBA
<span style="">21:33 Sun Jun 23

Could you recede how high the shading goes on the back, if that makes sense? Just for source

reuploaded <span style="">18:56 Mon Jun 24

CBA? 02:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Flaxpaw (K) - For Approval
colorpicked from the apprentice 00:59, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Add a couple more stripes to the back leg in the space, to match a little more with the apprentice?

Reuploaded 23:49, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Grasspelt (W) - For Approval


00:59, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Add just a teeny bit of shading under her chin, and connect the back and shoulder shading (if that makes no sense let me know)

smooth the main body shading a smidge? <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 04:34, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps expand the shoulder shading so it meets with the rest on the back/neck? 14:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Really minor but his eyes look black to me. Would it be possible to lighten the main eye color a bit? 14:48, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Some leaking shading on the bottom of the tail. 15:50, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Fernsong (W) ~ CBA
02:25, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Thin out the facial stripes on the cheeks just a tiny bit, and maybe connect the back leg stripe into a complete "u" shape (can redline if that makes no sense :D)

Reups Like this? 15:45, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you recede the pale on the haunch just slightly, or blend it more in? Just seems to pop a bit more here than the earlier images in the set

Reups Hope that made a difference, though that stripe is kinda in the way. 01:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Yup. CBA?

Twigbranch (Ki) ~ CBA
Colors from other images. Comments? 02:24, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:36, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Tree (Ki) ~ CBA
Colors from other images. Comments? 02:24, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:36, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt. K) - For Approval
All colors from the original kit. Man, that stripe was fun. 02:37, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the stripe, add more depth to the shading, and extend the earpink 03:53, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the haunch shading a bit as well? 14:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:41, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink a bit more, and the shoulder and haunch shading. 02:37, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Cherryfall (K) ~ CBA
a cutie

Maybe make the stripes just a tad thicker? 15:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

CBA? 02:43, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Brightspirit (K) - For Approval
this is so bad lol 03:07, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

please dont comment on the waste. 03:10, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you extend the tail dorsal stripe all the way through to the tip of the tail? 15:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Fernpelt (W) - CBA
tweaked her original pattern tbh kinda want to make her a classic. will tweak the rest eventually 03:51, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Blue Whisker (Kit) ~ CBA
a note: I have no OA claims left

Could you possibly give her some whiskers?

Re-uploaded

CBA?

Barley (W) ~ For approval
07:14, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Skywatcher (W) - For Approval
A true warrior. Comments? 14:15, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading underneath the ragged fur so it doesn't seem as flat?

Cypresspaw (K) ~ For Approval
OA claim from patch

Featherpelt (W) - For Approval
not a huge fan of this one but im done with tweaking it lol 16:52, June 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded tweaked face shading because it was bothering me 03:01, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the chest, including going upwards in the neck area, should be free of stripes? 03:04, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 04:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Silver Stripe (W) ~ For Approval
17:20, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Finleap (Ki) ~ For Approval
Colors from other images. Comments? 18:01, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the ginger on the front leg should extend up to the elbow? 19:50, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:37, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Hoppaw (Ki) ~ For approval
21:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
stinky boy 02:55, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

What is this for? He has images for all his mistakes. 02:59, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

He was in characters needing art? 13:36, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Flashnose (W) - For Approval
02:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

There are lighter stripes in tandem to the darker ones, and the stripes seem to be lighter overall on her old warrior. Would you like the file of the original warrior?

yeah sure if you dont mind LOL, i was going off her starclan sprite rather than the warrior  04:53, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel