Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 5

Jayfeather (MC) - Redone
Ok, I see that there's some gray I missed on this one too. xD Original artist was Bluestar1776 and he need to be short-haired, given a shorter tail, given mottles, and a scar. 19:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the excess gray and darken his feet at the bottom. Lighten his eyes a bit, as well. ~Shellheart

'''Reuploaded. ''' 19:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I love the tabby style. :] Make the mottles more noticeable and make the scar brighter. 19:39, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink a little

'''Reuploaded. ''' 20:07, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a little gray above the tip of his tail. Shellheart 20:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit. Great work! 20:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I didn't lighten the earpink because I think it looks better like this. 21:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink BIGGAH --

i can barely see the scar, and the herbs look too gray Bluestar11796 22:33, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. :] This looks epic, I love the stripes, it's so much better than his old one. XP Maybe make his tail a bit longer too, a shorter tail doesn't mean really short. . . his tail was never cut off or anything so there probably wouldn't be much of a difference. 02:28, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the scar a bit, the stuff is really dark and smudgy at the base of his tail(lighten and define it a tad), and stripe up the ear furthest from us. Blur the shading(not the overdone stuff on the base of the tail).- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 07:39, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste under his tail 17:08, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the scar. 17:52, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think the earpink needs to be bigger, so I didn't make it bigger. 18:25, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Changes made. Approved.