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Egg (Lo) ~ For Approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlights and blur them ,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o ☺~L e a f y ~  ☺ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less flat; It looks like there are only highlights. 02:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Start to do all thing please "Expand the highlights and blur them", right? ,16:58,February 6,2012 (UTC)

His hind leg doesn't look completely shaded, the one on <-- that side. :3 22:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafstorm, I did expand the highlights and blur them. I always do everything the people tell me to =3 And I just realized the shading needs to be blurred... ☺~L e a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 02:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think that shading is too heavy.

Cheshire, you should be specific. Where is the shading too heavy? Honestly, I think the highlights could be blurred a little more, and blended with the shading more. Right now, you can clearly tell where the shading/highlights meet. When I use them (rare, but I still use 'em now =P), I try and make them flow together. 17:43, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk* I made this such a fail >.< 14:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

He's kinda starting to look an off-white ish color. Why don't you ask Mistypebble, the artist of Egg's apprentice image, for the pelt color? She probably still has the original file. 04:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, are you still working on this? 23:00, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the hauche shading. <span style="">01:23, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

D= Yes, I'm still working. I couldn't get on yesterday, sorry =( 11:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's about time <3 12:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his ears and head, and lighten and blur the shading. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't believe no one noticed he needed a torn ear... 16:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more thick and blur the shadings more. 18:47, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, do you mean thicken the line-art on the torn ear or make the torn ear go down deeper? 20:03, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should go back up with the ear, but just cut dont like a "v". This cut sorta looks like a "u". Sorry if that made now sense whatsoever Also could you blur the shading a bit? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on it Leafy? 19:51, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm... I didn't know, so I just thickened the line-art with what Leafstorm said (does that make sense?) Oh, Re-uploaded 20:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You thickened it a bit too much hun. Just remove the top layer of pixels and that should be good. ( I think) And smoothen out the shading more, so it doesn't look like it has a green tint. 00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart from the top of the torn ear. 03:01, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading C: -- Fenris  They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 01:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait =( 15:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of all of that waste. 18:32, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o3o I always forget about the stupid waste Dx 19:13, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look a tad insane... What color did you shade with? It looks kinda greenish... 03:22, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the shading and blur it, and make the nick in the ear smaller like the apprentice image. 05:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs, and I'm pretty sure his nicked ear should look more V shaped. 11:24, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nick in the ear more the same size as the one on the apprentice charart. He was an apprentice after being a loner, I doubt the split would have shrunk over time. 17:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Ruby (Lo) ~ For approval
Alright, there she is...anyone like? comments please! Thanks

Tiger heart  ♥  01:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading, make sure the ear-pink fill the ear capacity, and erase the pink that's spilling from the lineart 01:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less hotpink, make it the same as her kit charart. <span style="">01:44 Sun Feb 5

Sure I'll reupload it in a second Tiger heart  ♥  01:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Tiger heart  ♥  01:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is still not 50% complete. Suggesting for deletion again. Get this to at least 50% completiong before uploading this again. 02:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, I suggest you look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement and blurring  02:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Thank you -- Tiger heart  ♥  02:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and I looked at the tutorials (thanks, Ivy) Tiger  heart  ♥  02:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading and fix the pixels on the paws, fill 'em in. 03:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay; Re-uploaded --☯ Tiger heart  ♥  03:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) It looks like some of the lineart on the legs and belly are blurred, possibly erase the extra pixels around it.
 * 2) Make the earpink the same colour and smudge it.
 * 3) Fill in the grey pixels on her feet and tail.
 * 4) Blur the shading LOTS . 05:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Er. Instead of the file archive, could you post the actual image? 05:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Redone -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't upload a new file each time you change it. Re-upload it over File:Ruby.loner.png. 05:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to blur the shading tons. Try using guassion blur under filters. There are also white pixels on the front paw closest to us. <span style="">08:26, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

You also still need to post the actual image, no the archive of it. And I don't think this is 80% complete, so you have a week to improve it before it's declined I believe. 08:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There are light pixels on the front paw, shadings are only applied not blurred, blurred lineart, some colours (ear-pink) are on the places where they can't be- this is all things they are wrong.. fix that 11:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sp... I can't upload the new one I did for a week? :( I fixed the pixels on the paw... hm... Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:26, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You can upload it. What Paleh means is, the charart/image doesn't look 80% complete. You have a week to make it look 80% complete. Constructivly, post the file, not the archive. 23:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:37, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So if I upload it again, will it get declined? If it's not perfect (by people's standards) Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  02:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind. Misunderstood it. Re-uploaded -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

... =_= Use the female lineart, not the male. 02:58, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons still. i can help you if you wish. Also smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">06:14, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Redone... still need to do something about the shading, I believe, but I fixed the pixels, used the female blank, and blended the earpink -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --❦ Woo  patch of green  273  04:14, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to be lightened up a lot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  08:48, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Redone once again, and lightened *wink wink* ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  22:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. If I could, I'd change the heading to "For Approval", because it looks way better than it did the first time. 00:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart I reserved this a week ago-- 00:46, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Acorn, you already have Birdpaw up, and you can have one up for approval at a time. 00:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blurring the earpink... Thanks Moon! Thanks! ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  01:45, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks some of her tail got cut off, but it might just be me. :3 18:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, Tigerheart, I mentioned if I could change the heading, and it doesn't mean you can change the heading. Only a senior warrior and above can do that if they feel the image is at least 80% complete. 20:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry... *embarrassed* I'm really sorry. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:13, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading on the body. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:12, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded... You can barely see the changes I made but they're there... lawl. Woo patch of green  ❦  03:14, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please stop thumbing your image. All you need to say is "re-uploaded" when you upload the file. xD 03:16, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

okay sorry. It won't happen again... is this 80% by any Senior Warrior's standards? I would like to do another and I have the day off from school today, so I have a lot of time to do a charart. How long do I have to wait until someone can approve this? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Has there been any comments besides mine in the past 12 hours? Woo patch of green  ❦  17:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Be patient. There's blurred lineart on her back leg. 21:53, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll fix that Woo  patch of green  ❦  22:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  00:12, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stop changing the file to a url. And she's light grey, not dark. Just follow the apprentice tutorials and try to match the other images as closely as possible. 00:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  00:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the face and blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  08:30, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the kit image. The kittypet is too dark and should be tweaked. 15:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded and lightened the shading... a lot. ♥ V-day  I want sugar ♥    22:39, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Woo, stop thumbing it. Just leave the file code alone, it'll update on its own. 22:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I will. Can I ask a question? What does Under Evaluation mean? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:40, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, it means that the image you put up is under evaluation by the project. If you post an image that is over 80% (I think) finished then you get to put the heading "For Approval" and you get promoted to an apprentice!! I hope I helped...and blur the "highlights." 21:45, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for telling me, and am an apprentice. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:17, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 04:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  04:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Un-thumbed. Define the shading on the face and blur the earpink. 05:08, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the body shading. c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  06:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  15:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the lineart near the earpink, also define the belly shading. 23:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:03, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the head shading. 14:11, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart in the ear, waste under the tail, and a misplaced black pixle on her leg (I think). Also, please define the haunch and shoulder shading and lighten the shading on the face a bunch. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 17:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:03, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darn, it's not showing the new version I did. ! Woo patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading. And please stop putting the image in a thumbnail. Right before it says "overwrite file," there's another section that says "Thumbnail" or "Fill image" (something like that). And click full image. 00:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  03:39, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind. Reuploaded again, there were black pixels on the paws Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  03:41, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the base of her tail. 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded you can't see it very well though Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  04:25, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. If I'm correct you've already had a week to get it up to 80%+ complete right? Unless someone hasn't updated the heading. <span style="">05:47, Mon, Feb, 20, 2012

I know I'm not part of the project, but I wanted to give you some critique. Could you possibly define the shading and blur it? 05:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Yes, I do think I've had over a week... does that mean it's declined? :( Lalala... you say  I am messing with your head, yeah yeah... ♪ ♪  20:22, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'd think so...but this is at least 80% by MY standards. I say it stays up. 20:25, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you! Happy Clover Day  ♣  21:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tail shading was too dark Happy Clover  Day  ♣  05:49, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is 80% There is some blurred haunch lineart, can you fix that? 04:09, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sure I can; thank you... so much! Thank you all! Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 06:17, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 06:17, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job apprentice. :3 <span style="">07:30, 22, 02, 2012

Umm, Isn't WooWoo been an apprentice already? 00:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 02:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC) Nah, I'm still a 'paw. Thanks everyone! Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 02:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. <span style="">07:17, 23, 02, 2012

There's blurred lineart in the ear, shoulder, neck, both back legs, tail, front leg, and along her back. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽  14:59, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 02:53, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

BLur the shaind, and smudge the earpink into the ear. Is there blurred lineart in the ear? I can't see it exactly, but it looks like there is. If there is, get rid of it. C: -- Fenris  They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 14:00, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded there was no blurred lineart  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 22:18, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and define your shading placement, look here for an idea on how it should look like. <span style="">23:56, 24, 02, 2012

Whoo... thanks! Sorry I couldn't fix it earlier. Swim meet. Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 01:54, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 01:55, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 02:01, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 02:31, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Try using Guassion blur on the shading layer/on the shading, it's under Filters. <span style="">09:21, 28, 02, 2012

Woo, just a notice: you have 4 days to get this approved before it reaches the four week time limit. I advise doing a quick recap of the apprentice tutorials and paying close attention to the parts about shading. You're almost there, you just gotta get it smoothed out! ^^ 17:30, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt A) ~ For Approval
Here she is....I realize that the shading could be blurred more, and that I may have gotten the image name wrong, but I will fix that in a moment. Comments? 21:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The filename should be Ivypool.apprentice.alt.png. Just re-upload over this, and you'll be fine. Also, blur the shading. 21:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Cloudskye, for clarifying the file name. 21:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needsto be blended into the pelt a bit more. 23:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and define the nose pink. <span style="">23:53 Wed Feb 8

Define the tail shading. 00:03, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, but still have that "smudged earpink" look. <span style="">06:30, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Lighten the eyes up. They looks rather dark. 22:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes should be fine if you just reverse the depth. It looks better if you have the dark bit closer to the white shiny and the lighter bit at the bottom. <span style="">07:08 Fri Feb 10

The eyes should also be green, as she was mistakenly described with them. 11:48, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste under her chest and a speck of waste along the bottom of the image. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 12:35, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Turns out, I forgot to add the nose pink, and go over detail. I fail. I feel overjoyed. 21:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

If it's a gray cat, then she has a gray nose. Thicken and blur the shading a ton 05:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on this -> ear 21:55, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate the blur tool 02:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Tried the gaussian blur tool, yet? If not, then try it, 'cause I think the shading needs to be blurred more. :P 02:14, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I use gaussian for all my shading. Unfortunately, I'm having so much trouble with the shading. I use Pixlr, so I'm not really sure how to fix it. I 'll play around with it though. 07:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tell me if the back needs more blurring. If I'm right, then I live in a pineapple. 08:10, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch shading could use blurring 08:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:57, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail and haunch shading more. 22:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste along the tail. 02:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. -- Elork   04:15, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Here's what I did: I redid the image. I like how it looks now. 19:56, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear a bit, and add definition to the eyes. <span style="">02:34 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded. 08:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  13:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:04, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth in the eye and blur the shading...? 23:53, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. <span style="">01:30, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Reuploaded. She looks good.... 05:32, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more, and lighten the whole image. 09:21, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur the shading anymore, because it comes out all blotchy, and if I make it lighter, the shading is either too light or comes out funky. Anyone have any tips? 07:29, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Occasionally, when I can't blur the shading anymore, I add a new layer to smooth out certain areas (the haunch and chest/face in this case), or you could try to smudge the shading. 02:24, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well....I can at least say I tried. 06:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You need to blur the shading a lot and darken the ear pink then blur it. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 00:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:25, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. 18:43, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:59, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken & blur the shading; also enlargen and darken the earpink. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 04:01, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading with your blur tool set to max. For solids, it's necessary. 17:31, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Alt.A) ~ For Approval
He was described as a fluffy gray cat. Comments? 17:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and define the shoulder shading. 17:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose a darker shade of gray unless he was said to have a pink nose. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 17:58, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it to the max. 18:45, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to all the belly and chest. <span style="">07:38, 22, 02, 2012

Reuploaded  I redid the shading, and I kinda like it better than the first. 13:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽  19:55, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 17:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading on the haunch a little less sharp-edged. If you know what I mean. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  23:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Where's your light coming from? The body says from the left but the face says the right. I'd say move the shading on the face to the other side and blur it a lot, and it should be ready for CBA then. 17:33, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Lo) ~ For Approval
Ooh, my third loner. And the last one. >:D Comments? 20:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shoulder shading. Lovely Mooneh ^^ 22:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly thicken the lineart on the color to match with the lineart of the loner. Wonderful! :3 22:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thankies :3 22:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a little more or smudge the fur into the ear a tad? :3 22:59, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and eye depth. Looks good, Mooneh! 06:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the long wait. I lost the .pdn (the original file with layers) so I couldn't mess anything up for a while. I have the .pdn on another computer, but it's an hour's drive away. I'm trying to get the file sent to me, so, don't say anything about fixing the tail shading, because I didn't. I just defined the eye depth. :3 11:32, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, maybe the color a bit thinner, the teeth a bit rounder (they kinda look like shark teeth) and define the shading on the neck, collar, teeth, and head. 03:06, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Scarlet, the teeth do match pixel for pixel the same as the last loner image, but, I can round them if you want me to. :3 11:39, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel of waste under his tail~ ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 14:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined tail shading, smudged pelt into earpink, and (hopefully) got rid of the waste under the tail. I lightened it, too. 22:41, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the collar thinner and straighter. 23:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the shoulder. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 00:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is still there o3o it's trapped between the hind leg farthest from us and the tail~ *stinks at explaining things* :|3 ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 03:56, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the stomach/belly. 03:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The changes aren't showing; I blurred the shading on flank/shoulder, went through every layer and got rid of waste, but I hate to say it, I can't make the collar thinner. I can re-do it if you want me to, but -cough-itwaskindofhard-cough-. 09:59, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading some and smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more....and define rhe shading on the front leg if there is any. *is shot* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 11:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken up the back and back leg shading because it looks like it's like, reaaaaly bright. Then blur it and the ear pink. I l0ve the collar! Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  03:38, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

I won't have the .pdn until Friday at the latest, so I won't work on it since then. Is that okay? *derp* 10:39, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, why not? Unless another senior warrior disagrees, we can wait for Friday. 17:34, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (A) ~ For Approval
<3 Frostfur. Comments? 02:18, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading <3 02:20, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is somewhat blotchy. Blend it into the pelt and together, and smooth/even it out.

The shading doesn't seem blotchy to me. However, it does need to be defined. 05:57, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I think I messed up the tail shading. Do I need to define the light source? 00:47, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and give it some volume, it looks kinda flat 03:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think the tail shading should be under the tail... ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 01:20, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Fallow, shading placement is artist's choice, remember that. 03:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well...blur the tail shading a bit. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 01:26, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll fix the earpink since it's so neon. 18:14, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and there is waste by the (our) left side of (our) right ear, near the (our) right side of the hind leg haunch and the front (the cats) right paw. <span style="">05:46, 27, 02, 2012

It might just be my computer, but it looks a bit pink-tinted. 09:45, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more. 14:51 Mon Feb 27 14:51, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I really had no idea what you said Dj, but I did erase the waste and blurred the earpink. 01:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the chest shading a little more? :3 03:58, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. D) - For Approval
He was described as bracken-colored on page one of Into the Wild. I took the colors from his other bracken alt. Comments? 02:27, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading and blur the tail shading. c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Everyone likez teh cats 06:50, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:58, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. ^^ 22:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Why not just blur the shading in general? xD 00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, lighten up the shading a bit. 01:04, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink 03:09, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the haunch shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 12:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:57, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the shading a bit and ever so slightly enlarge the earpink c: 11:31, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading C:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 13:49, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Pull the shading on the face back a bit. It sort of looks like he has a really narrow face with it like this. 17:35, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (Ki) ~ CBA
<3. All of his colors are from his leader (except the collar, of course). It was easy since the kit pose is close to the leader pose. :) ♫Purplemoon♪   I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  21:40, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Baww, such a cute little messiah. Define the ear pink, I think, and add shading to the bell. 21:48, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Changes Not Showing  ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:03, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Did you shade the collar? I can't see it quite well.

I shaded the collar. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:10, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the collar stick out on the ends instead of being connected with the lineart. There's a bit of waste along the left side (our left) on the edge of the collar. Lighten the shading on his tail, and define the shading on the collar to match the shading on his body. Also, could you make his bell smaller? ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 00:00, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded, Changes not showing again. ''' ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:19, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the collar shading a ton. 20:08, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's about as much as I can blur it without making it look messy. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  20:45, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and tone down the highlights. (only if you have them) 22:20, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights are fine. They have fine lighting, to me. Still, you need to blur the collar shading. 00:44, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around it... 00:59, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems a little inappropriate. When I did the leader, I tinted the shading red to add to the feeling of his flame colored pelt. Just click the transparency box on the layers dialogue and make sure it is the shading layer and bucket fill it with a very dark red ^^ 01:14, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Did you take the collar color from his KP? It seems quite a bit darker. And it seems like there's blank spots in it where you can see some ginger coming through. 18:25, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, why won't the changes show? ♫Purplemoon♪   I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:00, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

He's got waste around him still. 22:59, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

It must be your computer because there isn't any waste. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:04, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

I dont think so Purple. I see it too, ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 22:22, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Round out the collar lineart, seems a bit pointy. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 12:02, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  20:41, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

This is freaking adorable. CBA? 17:37, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ki) ~ CBA
Maple's was declined due to a lack of work. Comments? 23:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Awww adorable little furball! Define the light source.. <3 01:05, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink 03:10, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on at the top of the legs a little ^^ 06:18, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the shading just a tad and add some "highlights" (or erase some shading :3) 08:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ^^ 20:16, February 23, 2012 (UTC)'''

Lighten the image a tad. 22:55, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights/non-shaded parts :3 ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 01:23, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:25, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still, the define the light source. Pwetty! =3 23:27, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Does she need a collar? 00:32, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Added a collar. 18:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Take out the bell and replace it with a stone like she's wearing on the cover of Into the Woods. 19:21, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

The collar on the kittypet looks thinner, match it...? 20:35, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I think the collar's fine. 22:33, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or was the stone on the collar green? (Sorry, I'm picky about these things). 20:25, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the legs. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:14, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 22:01, February 27, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading on the collar and the tag (or whatever it is) x3 11:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:17, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? 15:38, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) ~For Approval
☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:15, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, like a lot XD 16:17, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur it too >8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 16:18, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

The light sorce is from above, so the light wouldnt reach under neith so it would be very dark x: Me and Stoneh had this conversation on a different loner~ ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:22, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it a smidge, then? :3 16:50, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Kay~ Reuploaded-- changes not showing o3o ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:55, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the brown paws? 23:25, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  ♡  P  o  u  n  c  e  y  !         ♡ 00:14, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Please lighten the shading on the legs. I realize where the light's hitting, but, it seems too dark..and it bothers me. 11:53, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think that she should have more stripes on her legs... 11:58, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I added highlights to the legs. :3 I won't add any more stripes because I copied the kittypet image. ♡ P  o  u  n  c  e  y  !         ♡ 16:19, February 26, 2012 (UTC) It may just be my stupid  computer, but the shading looks like it's tinted green. 17:16, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's your computer o3o 18:07, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, when I see all of Sasha's pixels side-by-side, the colour on yours seems a little too yellow, make her slightly red? 18:40, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerstar (Alt W) ~ For Approval
First official Photoshop charart. :3 Discussion is on the talk page. Comments? 23:24, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Lighten up the whole image a tad, and make the earpink smaller. <3 23:26, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks, Stoney! =) 01:37, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink >8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 04:25, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if it's my night vision, but I can just see the tail scars. Can you define it? 04:26, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful Ivy! Can you blur the scars on the shoulder/haunch just a tad? 06:11, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. I'm having a rough time telling it apart from the lineart. 11:54, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. xD 17:09, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe run the dodge tool over the scars on the tail? I can hardly seen them 19:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink darker and define it. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 21:12, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Hey look, it's better now! :3 01:37, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  04:47, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Skywatcher (Ki) - For Approval
Look at the adorable little crazy cat! Needed a kit for the same reason as Firestar. 01:01, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

When was he described as a kit? I don't remember it being the same instance as Firestar. 01:33, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

If Firestar gets one for remembering a smell, then Skywatcher gets one for remembering his first mouse. 01:49, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

He never specified how old he was when he got his first mouse. In Firestar's dream, he was still nursing. I don't think this gets a kit charart. 02:08, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Also, if I remember correctly, he said he remembered catching his first mouse. How many kittens do that? 02:15, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sky points out the edge of SkyClan's territory and the small cave where he was born. If Firestar remembers what he did, Sky remembers enough. 02:23, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Remembering a cave seems to me to be more than just a smell. Why not? o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  02:26, February 28, 2012 (UTC)