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Feathertail (Star) - Redone
ok round two, OA was scarletwind. 00:34 Sun Aug 30

Can you lighten the chest shading? This looks awesome 00:36, August 30, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded, also defined the stripes some. 01:02 Sun Aug 30

I think there should be two clear stripes on her neck-chest area, according to the warrior and apprentice versions. This is nice, btw

Oh and, mind if you tell me which side is the light source coming from? I'm seeing it at the right on the tail, but from left on the head and one of the paws...

reuploaded. thanks! is this better? 01:54 Mon Aug 31

Yep! Would you mind to fix the shading a tiiiny bit for these parts if you get it?

The paws are contracting the light source. Either switch that around or change your light source. 11:58, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading all around? And maybe define the stripes on her back? 14:33, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think if she lightens the shading, she'll get asked to define it (or darken it) again. For now, I think it's fine, as we don't want to send Splook into a circle of endless shading tweaks.

reuploaded. 00:03 Wed Sep 2

Now the left paw (her) shading is pretty much gone... tbh I like the old tail more and I'm feeling dumb :P is there a way to make the tail stripes look less hard edged? Maybe smudge them a little bit more?? .^.

reuploaded. edited the tail some, is this better? 22:50 Thu Sep 3

Silver tabbies have black stripes, these are gray. Darken them quite a bit please  Storm  &#9835;  23:37, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

I color picked them from the others, and they look like they match the others as well. 23:44 Thu Sep 3

She's silver-gray, not silver. The stripes are fine.

I think you should thicken the stripes on her tail, as that is what they look like on her other images. Nice <<<<<333 01:14, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. thanks <3 20:40 Sat Sep 5

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Bramblestar (A) - Redone
OA was Insane. Redone to look more like Tigerstar. I used Tigerstar's warrior file and apprentice, and to make him look more like him I added the cream belly + paws. If I need to remove that, go ahead and say so. 23:30, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him more, he's dark brown. Storm &#9835;  23:34, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

I picked the color from Tigerstar's warrior and apprentice. Do you want me to do it anyways? 23:36, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yes. Wasn't this nominated a while ago to be dark? Why did this suddenly change? And can you also smudge the pale chest and smooth it into (blend) the fur more? Storm &#9835;  23:38, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: It was nominated to be redone afterwards. I darkened him and I'll smudge the stomach in the next upload. 23:41, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Told to darken it. I also kinda lied. I'll smudge the stomach in the nexttt upload I promise. Also, I'm not digging the color of the earpink. Should I change that? 00:33, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I think it could be dulled a bit yeah Storm  &#9835;  00:53, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:

The pale parts look hard edged. Blur/smudge them more? Pretty <3 01:13, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

^ same with the earpink. 02:33 Fri Sep 4

Is the furthest back leg supposed to have no stripes??

Re-uploaded: He didn't have stripes on his leg, my bad. I fixed that, the earpink, and the pale parts. Does anyone want me to make his underbelly pale as well? 23:25, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Nah I guess it's fine. Define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us? 00:30, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 02:21, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

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Stormtail (W) - Tweaked
OA was Echomist, darkened. 23:32, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him a lot more- you don't need to go as dark as Mistystar, but he should be darker than this.

Re-uploaded: 02:53, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him just a tad bit more.

Re-uploaded: 23:24, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

It could be my iPad screen but he's still pretty light....could you darken it some more? 05:58 Sat Sep 5

I think it's your iPad screen. He's pretty dark... 06:03, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

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