Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 114

Turtle Tail (Star) - Redone
if I have to remove the white entirely, so be it. I ain't gonna care. I was just told it was fine before I posted it, so who knows?

i think it should be removed. if people are so against torties having white theyll redo perfectly fine images, then none should have any. 12:36, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should remove the white. This also goes for the kittypet. 13:16, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the right front leg? Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:42, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and chest? And honestly, this is not able to be considered excessive white for a tortoiseshell...it's actually a pretty normal amount that I have seen quite frequently, but Skt has a good point. Maybe just shrink it down a bit if you were already told that having the white was okay. 14:22, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

agreed with removing the white 14:28, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

its not really about genetics here; if people are gonna bitch about white on these and no other pelt type can have white then neither can these. people were so insistent on it so theres no picking and choosing in that case. 17:39, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, I already figured I'd need to remove the white... I don't think multiple people needed to say it; one was more than enough.

As much as I’m loving this pattern, Turtle Tail and Sparrow Fur share the same markings. Since this is up anyway, can you try to match Sparrow Fur’s image? 00:53, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, no one told me that before they were nominated, and I already have all of six (ancient, rogue, kittypet, queen, star, and the early settler) of her images done. Given that Sparrow Fur only has one image (the kit) approved, it really would not be fair at all to force me to redo all six images. =/

You've already done all six? Alright then I'll nominate Sparrow Fur for redo. 03:39, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is getting extremely annoying.

Well, whoever wrote about Turtle Tail should get their facts straight. (Love you, Erins.) Define the shading on her back. 13:25, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Like the kittypet, the tail should probably have at least a little fluff on it since this is the longhair blank. Also, is there a reason it's so thin compared to the normal tail?

Paleh, it literally says "a short and stubby tail", so that's why it's so thin. But, okay. I'll fix it later, since people keep disregarding her description in order for more fluff. I still don't think I'd have had this problem if I used the short-haired blank...

Re-uploaded.

24 hours.

Turtle Tail (KP) - Redone
same as the StarClan image.

Re-uploaded. Removed the white.

As much as I’m loving this pattern, Turtle Tail and Sparrow Fur share the same markings. Since this is up anyway, can you try to match Sparrow Fur’s image? 00:53, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

No. Jayce must be very very proud of this, I'd rather redo my Sparrow Fur rogue than have him redoing his. Just saying

Honestly, no one told me that before they were nominated, and I already have all of six (ancient, rogue, kittypet, queen, star, and the early settler) of her images done. Given that Sparrow Fur only has one image (the kit) approved, it really would not be fair at all to force me to redo all six images.

You've already done all six? Alright then I'll nominate Sparrow Fur for redo. 03:40, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

This might not be the place to point this out, but I just noticed that currently she has an "alternate" description of white with orange and black splotches. Torties come in various color combinations, but one of the most common is ginger and black. The description's just a more specific wording for tortie and white (similar to calling a brown tabby "brown with black stripes"). Her real description doesn't have anything that contradicts that right now, so really the alt should be added to her main description. While this would still need to be redone to match that alt description (though maybe not the queen, since that's already approved), the white markings don't actually need to be removed.

Re-uploaded. Matched the alt queen, but since I'm going to be tweaking that one anyways (when it's reuploaded to the normal queen; the tail needs to match the rest of them), I darkened the colors a bit.

The tail looks a little odd right now. I'm not sure if it's because it's curving, or because it doesn't have any fur (which it probably should since this is the longhair blank), or if it's just the kittypet blank in general. Maybe try to make it less curved and more furry and see how that looks?

it doesnt need to be fluffy. but maybe just slightly rounder. 19:33, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful image! I think you could define the ear pink a little bit. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:08, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

24 hours.