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Rosepetal (W) - Declined
She needed to be brought back to the color she was before to match her other images, and actually be dark cream. I need to fix some shading, I know. I'll do that in the next upload. Breeze whisker  21:26, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, define it, and make it more triangular. 22:16, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe tinge the shading browner/redder. She looks kinda ashy/gray. 00:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. (Yes, the highlights are tinted green.) Breeze  whisker  00:56, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the base just a tad? It doesn't quite match the other two images.

Make the earpink more triangular and a tad smaller. 01:03, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/redden the ear-pink 03:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's all I'm going to do with the earpink. Breeze whisker  17:37, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and perhaps make it thinner around the back area. 21:01, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading along her back looks fine...but maybe define the shading on her legs a tad? 01:18, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  04:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add a bit more shading to the back of her head and ears? 16:22, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Breeze whisker  05:32, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

I know you said that's all you were going to do with the earpink, but I can barely see it. Can you at least define it a little? 15:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a smidge. 03:45, 08, 07, 2012

Sorry, but this has been up for far longer than a week. Declined. 05:53, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Declined
Needed ragged fur (Changes may not be showing yet) Ohgawd I killed it Comments? 01:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. -- 16:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the ragged-ness? O_o Maybe make it match her queen? 16:22, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, wouldn't her fur be a bit more ragged as both a loner and rogue, probably from the fighting, and all of that?

True, but I think it could be toned down just a tad. XD Skt Omnia vincit amor 20:18, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 04:47, 01, 07, 2012

Blur the tail shading. Nice job, Stoner. 21:00, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Wait - should I tone down the furriness or not? I dunno...but I kinda think that the queen has a little bit of raggedness... 23:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know, but it makes more sense for her to be fluffier when she's outside a Clan and doesn't care about her appearance. I think it should stay... 23:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should tone it down just a tad. Yes she'd be more ragged outside the Clan, but this is going a bit overboard. 22:10, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the fur looks fine, I've even seen strays that look like that. -- 18:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

It should be toned down. This is very ragged-y. xD 23:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I agree; the ragged-ness should be toned down. Even if she IS outside the Clan, it's far too much. 01:49, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

This has been up for a week too... Sorry, but I have to decline it. 05:58, July 8, 2012 (UTC)