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Whispering Breeze (Ki) ~ For Approval
Wow it feels like a while......my first charart on a laptop, comments? 08:38 Fri Jan 9

Add a few more stripes, thicken them a tad, and lighten up the shading on <== side, I can't see the pattern through it. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:39, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ---> foreleg and lighten the overall shading a bit 11:26, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge and lighten the stripes. They look too dark to me. 17:24, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the stripes, maybe? They look really hard to me. 19:20, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Gosh I completely forgot Reups I've been so busy sorry 15:49 Thu Jan 15

The forhead stripes still look hard. Good job on her. She's beautiful!^^ 20:49, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and thin them out. They look really fat, unless they're that way on the other images. 22:55, January 15, 2015 (UTC) The shading on this < side is still a bit too dark? Maybe lighten it? 02:29, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I hate tabbies 09:22 Sat Jan 17

It's still very dark. Lighten it up? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:04, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

If I lighten it anymore I'm going to be asked to define it. It's fine. 18:57 Sat Jan 17

Define the neck/lower face shading a little bit. Doesn't need too much. 21:06 Sat Jan 17

Define the light on her tail. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:44, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes in her forehead match a bit more. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:07, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

define all the shading that isnt on our left side tbh. 11:28, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

You still workin'? 19:00, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading to the left. 20:28 Tue Jan 20

Lighten the shading on the left side of the body, like Gia said, and lighten the shading on that right front paw. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:44, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes and base up a bit, they're pretty dark compared to her other images. 19:49 Thu Jan 22

The stripes on <-- cheek are still hard edged and so his the forehead. ~ ☾Brambleshade The Cookie Monster  is out for you! 21:46 January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze is a she-cat, actually. Also, shouldn't the earpink be under the shading? 22:39 Thu Jan 22

I've been told it's artists choice, Gia. Meh, personally I put mine under my shading, at least my first or second layer. But yeah it's artists choice. 21:28, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Icicle (Ki) ~ For Approval
oh look more kits 19:42 Sun Jan 18

Re-uploaded oh look waste <span style="">19:43 Sun Jan 18

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit? 19:45, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:32 Sun Jan 18

The shading is leaking from <== this side. Blur and define the shading. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:51, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:07 Mon Jan 19

The shading is still leaking at the same place. Perhaps make a new layer, shade over the leaking part and remove the waste? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:43, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Where is it leaking? <span style="">03:18 Tue Jan 20 03:18, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

<== this side. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit, if you don't mind.

Are you sure those eyes aren't just one plain colour? Also, brighten up the face more please? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

The face brightness looks fine to me. 21:43, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Erase a little of the shading on both front paws, they shouldn't be entirely in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:46, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean "are you sure those eyes aren't just one plain color?" Do you want me to define the pupil shading? Also re-ups <span style="">22:17 Tue Jan 20

re-ups freakin' tails, man <span style="">22:21 Tue Jan 20

re-ups WAAASTEEEE also i fixed the eyes for you, at least i think i did. also dulled the highlights because they were wayway too bright <span style="">22:26 Tue Jan 20

It's still leaking a bit. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:21, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">22:26 Wed Jan 21

re-ups <span style="">22:30 Wed Jan 21

re-ups wow i swear i can't do anything first try lmao <span style="">22:42 Wed Jan 21

re-uploaded 4: a new hope <span style="">23:29 Wed Jan 21

Lol. Could you define the leg shading just a bit? Also, I think the shading is leaking on the head over on <--- this side. Lookin' good! 21:30, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups i'm DONE with this shading uGH <span style="">23:50 Fri Jan 23

are changes showing? <span style="">23:52 Fri Jan 23

Tallpoppy (Star) - For Approval
Eh..her pattern is hard :p 20:18, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? This is beautiful. <span style="">22:31 Sun Jan 18

Thin out the stripes. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:22, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on her cheek looks flat. brighten or smoothen it maybe? Correct me if I am wrong. 13:30, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I think the stripes are good in terms of thickness. Maybe blur them on a very very very very light setting to make them a bit less hard-edged?

Also, lighten the shading a smidge? Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:47, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 21:04, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a little bit. <span style="">22:08 Thu Jan 22

lighten her a tad, she looks very dark. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:41, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Have a Honeykit! Base Colour from SnowedLightning, everything else from apprentice. --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:22, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 06:15, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 08:44, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

IDK ligten up the shading a bit? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 23:18, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 23:27, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload forgot to tone down tail and left leg shading. -- 23:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the neck and tail shading some, and define the light on the left <--- front leg. Also, define where the lightsource is coming from on the tail. the body says from over < here, while the tail says it might be coming from below. So far so good! 21:34, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 22:51, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail more and make the light on the <== bigger. <span style="">23:54 Fri Jan 23

Reupload -- 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Add light to the back paw. this looks nice! :) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:12, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! -- 05:20, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs a bit please. Looking good :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:33, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Frogtail (Ki) - For Evaluation
Firetail is back... with Frogkit this time! I used PAINT.NET and colorpicked from his apprentice image, comments? (P.S. this is technically my first charart again since Dustkit got declined) Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 00:18, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's texture... ? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:22, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be texture or not? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 21:55, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

It's a soft mottle-like texture. Which it looks really neat and if anyone nominates it for that I'm gonna like, idk, feed you to the Dark Forest or something.

So I guess I'll just scribble at paintbrush size 4 or something and blur to get mottled texture. Again, everything is from the apprentice image. IDK I guess it looks more like brindled right now. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 23:17, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups - How's this for mottles? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 02:07, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Really nice. :) define the shading everywhere. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:10, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

That looks really nice for your first! I agree with Fox Girl, please define the shading. <span style="">15:37 Sat Jan 24

Reups Done Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 00:23, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and <== leg. <span style="">00:38 Sun Jan 25

His nose is hot pink. Sure of it. Make it a little light, please. <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

Snowflake (Ki) ~ For Approval
Best attempt at texture. ^^ 03:06, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to this ==> leg. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading and blur the neck shading a little. 22:45, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste above the <== ear, and blur the shading a bit. <span style="">19:52 Thu Jan 22

There's no waste, actually o_O my phone was showing something completely different <span style="">22:38 Thu Jan 22

Define the shading, please. i literally can't see any.-- 21:37, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink on the <== ear a little more. <span style="">02:48 Sun Jan 25

Sniff (Ki) - For Approval
here have a tiny kit. I'm going back to shooting Geth now, so have fun.

He has yellow eyes. ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:58, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Whoops. May have mixed his eye color up with something else.

He looks flat on the head and the neck. Could you define the shading there? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:09, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also did other stuff.

Define the shading/light on the tail, please. 21:48, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading a little more. It's still hard to see. <span style="">23:05 Fri Jan 23

Actually, define the shading pretty much everywhere except the head. <span style="">23:56 Fri Jan 23

Re-uploaded. I actually just darkened it, since I think it's defined pretty well- I'd lightened the shading before I posted it before and I thought it was kinda light...

Shaded Moss (K) ~ For Approval
Idk. *shoves little Shaded Moss towards ya'll* 21:54, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white- he looks pale gray and black. This also needs to be named File:Shaded Moss.kit.png, so I'm gonna rename that for you.

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 22:20, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge the patches more with a size 1 hard edged tool? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:08, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define or add the texture? It's there in his other images. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:14, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''He has texture; hes just very dark so its not really noticable. I lightened his base color a few ticks on the opacity bar to define it, though. 02:07, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

On his other images, the texture is noticeable. However on here I can't even see it. Mind if you can define it? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:23, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the white on the <== leg. <span style="">12:43 Thu Jan 22

Isn't he only meant to have a white muzzle and chest? Because here the white in his face expands to his whole chin. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:27, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Its the same amount i added as on the ancient? 01:20, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did try to define the texture, however.-- 18:12, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Webfoot (Alt A) ~ For Approval
我讨厌他 =p but I like how this turned out. =) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:04, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

He looks so much like Bramblestar! His right earpink ---> looks dark. Brighten it up a little? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 21:41 Thursday January 22 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be pink on his nose, or is it supposed to be black? There's nothing right there right now, so =P <span style="">22:10 Thu Jan 22

The nose color doesn't matter, however, as for the ear pink, I'll fix that later. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:33, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped lightened up the base color too. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:53, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt Leader) ~ For Approval
Those eyes look absolutely evil, she's a mad kitty O.O ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:21, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

She actually looks cross-eyed... do you mind tweaking that?

Re-upped whoops, made her look too evil XD ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:43, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

She looks striped. Either soften the texture by a lot or get rid of it completely. <span style="">16:07 Thu Jan 22 2015

Whooah! Those eyes look new. Also, the ear pink on this ---> side looks differant from the one on the other (Dont have to match it perfectly!) <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

Also the tip of her tail looks cut off due to the Image size. Are you sure this picture is the right size? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 21:39 Thu Jan 22 2015 (UTC)

The earpink probably looks different because of shading. There's some waste by the tip of the tail. Also, please define the tail shading. This looks really nice! <span style="">21:44 Thu Jan 22

Die waste die ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:32, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's also a little bit of waste between the base of the tail and the back leg. 17:58, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel. Though I think I see waste on the top of the head too. Correct me in if am wrong <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 01:20 January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading some more. 01:28, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

I see no waste on top of the head. I do see the waste by the base of the tail, though. <span style="">02:47 Sun Jan 25

I suck at shading ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:45, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Ki) ~ For Approval
I gotta tell ya, I'm getting used to seeing all these kits. Oh my gosh it's so good to be home c: Comments? 18:32, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading- I can't see it at all.

Define the earpink while your at it. 18:36, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, I tried. This base color is a butt to work with... 18:44, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth it out a bit? Right now it looks quite hard-edged, especially along his right leg. 18:47, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

It's pretty smudged already..may I have another opinion? 18:51, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Define the shading, though. <span style="">23:05 Fri Jan 23

Re-uploaded. 14:37, January 24, 2015 (UTC)