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Polly (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay so I didn't know I even had Photoshop, and then Snowed gave me the file, and I have zero idea how to get the colors so oopsies. wow that's a looooot of layers snowed how do you even keep track

idk man I just do. it must be magic. also, define the texture.

re-up changes if needed.

Stripes look thicker/more dense on kittypet, and thin out the M on the forehead a little

So, what do you want me to do about the stripe issue? keep in mind that this is a kit image, so stripes are obviously going to be thinner and smaller. Also, seeing as these blanks are in different positions. . . you get the point. Not asking for a second opinion. . . just asking Snowfall to clarify.

Know you're not asking for another opinion, but I know these blanks are a pain in the ass to match designs with, and sometimes you gotta cram tons of stripes into one place. I think it's fine.

The only reason I even mentioned the stripes was because on the kittypet there's more dark brown than light brown showing but I get that it's a small blank and a different angle. Though I still think the M should be more thin if you can make it that, and smooth out the top -> side of the M as well. Lastly, define shading depth a tad?

re-up I'm hesitant to do this, because I don't want it to be too red.

The "M" stripe on the kittypet image has a much more defined shape and is less curved, if that makes sense? Nice image. 18:42, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes should be smudged a bit.

re-up thanks

maybe smudge out the stripes a lil' more, just to give that rougher effect that the KP has

re-up

Define the shading some more. 20:02, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

The light brown spot on the haunch (I think?) near the back paw looks a little out of place, for a lack of a better word. Try smudging the shading towards that area, or just fill it with shading, since there are plenty of blanks that have shading in that specific spot. 00:24, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I hope this is what you mean?

There's waste in the area between the main body and tail. 22:23, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

re-up O.o don't know how that didn't save in gimp

could u like desaturate the shading a lil? i like tints and all but it kinda makes the right side look really, really red :) like maybe just play with the hues or smth 16:38, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

o and it should also fix the problem with shading depth which could stand to be defined a lil as well 16:38, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Still feel like the shading needs a lot of depth. Remember, depth isn't the same as defining the shading. It's adding a thinner, darker layer of shading to made it more 3 dimensional

re-up

Try and add a little more depth to the shading; I can't see terribly much of a difference between the last upload imo

Define the earpink? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:58, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Snail Shell (A) ~ For Approval
I really am proud of this, hope you like it. PepperPiper11 (talk) 18:24, July 5, 2017 (UTC) This is great, Pepper. Define the shading and shading depth. 18:30, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some smaller speckles, kind of like the kit has? This is beautiful.

Smooth out the shading on the furthest hind leg? 18:41, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Purdy! Add some shading to <-- ear and define the earpink in --> ear? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 18:43, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks everyone! PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:07, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think the colors are off a little, because when I was making the warrior, Skye told me that the kit is based off Ashfur's colors

Reuploaded  I did use highlights, that might be the reason why, but I did colorpick the colors again. ^^ PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:28, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

You did a good job for your first image! Define the earpink in the -> ear. Any chance I could get a picture of the image of the image without the highlights? If the white are the highlights, then I would say tone them down a little bit. 19:47, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to match the kit's. I also suggest colorpicking from the kit, as it is the first one in the set. :) This is really good, Pepper, you've got a lot of artistic talent, considering this is your first charart. 20:11, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, as it looks like it's throwing off the coloring. The kit is the first one in this set, as Shypaw said.

Reuploaded Thanks, Shypaw! I colorpicked from the kit, and deleted the highlights. PepperPiper11 (talk) 13:46, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the spots look a little too big, and try smudging them

Reuploaded 15:40, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch a little bit? 18:48, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

SNAILS anyway you should try and soften the spots and make them more round (they look too pointy rn) to match the other images. in addition, i think there are also less spots on the other images :] 00:43, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

on his other images it looks like there are more very faint speckles throughout his pelt. maybe smooth the shading on the hind leg closest to us. 17:20, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

This can be for approval now because it meets that guideline :)

Reuploaded Thx Spooky! 00:18, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the arms, paws, shoulders, and perhaps the back leg. 20:03, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:48, July 11, 2017 (UTC)

The chest shading near the shoulder appears to be leaking away from the lineart

Add some more dapples on the legs and paws, and make the patch on the tail-tip reach the lineart. It looks like it's leaking a bit from the top. 00:27, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:53, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Add a few more dapples to the head.

Reuploaded  20:22, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Apologies for the lack of comments, Pepper. It's been a busy week for me. Anyways, the dapples should be smaller and more broken up. I used a certain brush in Photoshop to get the effect that I have on the kit... what program are you using to make this? It'll help me describe in better detail exactly how to get the effect that I used.

It's OK Snow. I am on vacation and don't get back till Tuesday or Wednesday. I don't have the file with me either. So i can't re upload it till I get back. ;-; 13:21, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Snowed, im back from vacation. I use Gimp btw. 02:05, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Thin out the shading on the chest and the shoulder, alongside the front paws. (If I am not being clear, I can make an outline if you would like.) 01:21, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

Mosspaw (SC) (A) ~ For Approval
Hey y'all. I can't smudge. 19:45, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the farthest ear

Define shading, maybe? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 19:48, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ew, waste. 20:01, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's a white streak of waste in the top left corner.

Mind defining the shading a little more? 22:25, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

The patches aren't smudged right. They seemed to be more smudged in a upper right direction, and are more feathery? Sorry, i can't explaing stuff.

Reups oh, I'm horrible at explaining stuff too, star. I touched up some of the smudges. I think I got what you were saying idk? 02:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smoothen out the shading on the head? :) It looks a little bit blotchy. }

Reups 01:06, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading and lighten it on the face. 23:37, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 16:39, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

This is hot af. Can you make the <--- side of the face brown where the cheek is? Thats how its supposed to be o3o 19:04, 7/26/2017

Storm (Ro) (Ki) - For Approval
This probably doesn't match well. 19:47, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, shading depth, and smooth the shading a bit.

Reuploaded 20:09, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It might just be me but she looks tinted yellow compared to the other images. 20:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

^^I see the yellow tint too.

Reuploaded I put a shading tint on the image. (if that's what you're talking about) Sorry, I should have said something about that. 21:14, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on her other images seem more... Clustered, for the lack of a better word. If you'd like, I can try and dig up the file for the ES. (Though my attempt at matching her pattern is pretty bad hh)

In between the thick tail stripes should be very thin, hardly noticeable stripes, i think.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better. :) And Fox, you don't have to dig the file out, you probably have so many other files and my computer doesn't load email anyway. 01:51, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the face and chest? Also, do you think you could curve the neck shading rather than having it be sort of a straight line, if that makes sense? 01:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

awww she's so cute (he?) ((: a suggestion is maybe u could extend the stripes to the empty area on the right hand side? cuz there should be stripes on her haunch area. 04:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Gah this is so hard to explain *.* but I feel like the stripes on her other images aren't as... Messy? Like they seem to form a more orderly pattern, if you get me. There also appears to be texture on her other images, so that also needs to be added.

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt. :) Hopefully this is close to what you meant, Fox. :D 00:35, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 23:36, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:45, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and smooth the bit of shading on the flank thing next to the -> arm

Reuploaded 21:55, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading between the front legs. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:59, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:27, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Ki) - For Approval
Demonic small blanks. And yes, before you ask, the entire side of the image is supposed to be white. This pattern isn't meant to be very visible from the front.

There's white waste above the right ear. :) 05:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also blurred a couple things.

Could you swap either the flank shading or the facial shading so that the light source is consistent?

I knew I messed something up with this. I'll fix the head shading in the morning... this is the one source that still confuses me, even after almost six years of being a lead. =/

If you plan to swap the head shading then the shading on that -> leg also needs to be swapped (dw I get confused too xd)

could you maybe define/darken the shading depth :] love her new pattern hh (her old one is still the best) 20:27, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Her original pattern was the best, hands down. But noooo, that stupid tortie vote happened. =/ I will forever be bitter about it, and there ain't anything anyone can say that will make me believe otherwise.

I might be wrong -- light sources really aren't my thing -- but I still think that the head shading should swapped to be consistent with the source shown on the rest of the image. 13:07, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

I get that you're upset about the tortie vote, but with this new citation this pattern would've happened anyway :/ 13:31, 7/24/2017

The tortie vote happened ... you are allowed to be bitter, but I do not believe protesting like that gets us anywhere. Can you smooth out the shading? 23:35, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Icy, that was unnecessary. You already told me about it on Skype, and bringing it here was uncalled for. We already discussed this and it feels like you're trying to start an argument with me. I'll fix the shading in the morning.

I think your head shading contradicts the light source.

Ivy already said that; I haven't reuploaded yet with the fixed source.

Oh, sorry :P Should we even be able to see the tail? Her tail is stumpy, and with the position the blank is in, the kit's tail wouldn't be able to reach that far around. Stumpytail's kit image doesn't show the tail.

It actually was not unnecessary, I have the right to respond to a comment on the talk page. It is not an argument with you, and therefore I will not be continuing it. Responding to Danny's comment, I actually think you would be able to see the tail on this image. Stumpytail's tail seems a tad shorter compared to Turtle Tail, but I actually will double check with the file. 01:18, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, actually, their tail length is indeed the same, Turtle Tail's actually is a bit longer. So yes, the tail would need to be removed / not seen. 01:19, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (Ki) - For Approval
I hate how gross this is but. Here he is. (Also, sorry for snatching this literally 5 minutes after it was declined, I've had my eyes on this dude for practically forever)

Smooth out the shading? It's alright man, it's free game once it's declined.

reups Properly smoothed shading? I don't know her.

Can you define the shading and possibly expand it?

reups I hated the shading so I redid it and it's still bad but it's a little better

i think the shading between the legs covers too much area, it kinda makes it look like theres a dent where his (her?) stomach should be 20:29, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused, is it because I have not worked on this chaart in a while that someone else can do it? Cause thats ok I don't really care. Actually, thanks for doing it I needed help. I'm just confued on the rules. Or is it because it was declined

Oh i see never mind XD

Bananablue42903 (talk) 17:08, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking in one spot on ---> leg. 17:43, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a little bit? 18:13, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

reups played with some layer settings i'm so bad at smooth shading or any shading at all

reups fixed some stuff. I just realized one reason this sucks is because it's the first solid colored kit image I've done and I hate solid colored cats that also don't have texture. Shading is impossible.

Mistmouse (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
Dayum son 15:46, 7/25/2017

Define the shading everywhere but the chest?

reup I just darkened the shading from what I had it on before 13:29, 7/26/2017

Define shading on the tail? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:00, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

reup 23:50, 7/26/2017

Speckletail (Alt Q) - For Approval
All colors except the stripes obviously are from her regular queen. <span style="">15:57 Tue Jul 25

well i mean technically if you do it like this, she should have black stripes on her normal image and she shouldn't get an alt then <span style="">16:00, 7/25/2017

Reuploaded I just didn't know if I would have been required to keep the same base. This looks better anyways and not as...pastel vomit-y (for lack of a better way to descibe it) with a duller toned base. <span style="">16:05 Tue Jul 25

Can you add some shading to the -> ear? It looks flat rn

Winter, this would be an alt regardless. It was outright said that Speckletail being said to have black stripes was a mistake, so I think Sunjaw can use whatever color base she sees fit for this, even if it's the colors from the regular queen.

base colour shoukd probably be a bit paler or more golden but idk might renominate the other images 05:56, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really want to make this pale silver but that might be too far /: <span style="">15:51 Wed Jul 26

Honestly i wouldnt be against it, since mostly all cats with black stripes are either gray or silver <span style="">19:43, 7/26/2017

there's nothing that says she isn't golden, this is only about the markings. realism has nothing to do with it, regardless if thats how it works irl. 19:46, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some shading to the muzzle a bit and define the shading on the tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 22:01, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
now 100% smudge and blur free 21:10, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the back? 23:05, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think the back has shading...? Doesn't seem like it to me.

it's the regular apprentice shading source, why would i put shading there 07:13, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Oh okay. Sorry for pointing it out, then. 20:21, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

u dont need to apologise it was just a bit confusing 20:33, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading overall? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:57, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Alt. Lo) ~ For Approval
Ravenpaw is my bby. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:05, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

This should be named File:Ravenpaw.loner.alt.png (I think) Also maybe dull down the tint on the tail and face? Lovely image. 01:10, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uplaoded. '''And renamed! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:17, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

I thought we decided he wouldn't get this alt since it's not significant enough? I remember something like this being posted once before, and it was declined due to it not being that big of a difference from his normal images.

Oh I didn't think I knew about that, I'm sorry. You can decline it then. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:33, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Nah, I'm gonna wait until others comment before I do anything with it. That's not fair to you if I just decline it based on what I can vaguely remember.

I don't remember this being declined so I assume it was before I joined, but I don't think this is a big enough difference to have an alt. I can skim through the declined archives if it's in there.

not a comment on the image itself but if this gets declined, shrewtooth's lighter muzzle alt should be removed too then it seems like the same case 19:35, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

tbh this is a very small difference and really shouldnt be an alt <span style="">20:25, 7/26/2017

Considering Shrewtooth's lighter muzzle alt was approved, and that's just about as minor as this one, then I don't think this should be declined. 23:24, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think it's worthy of an alt, tbh, just because it's not that much of a difference. On that same note, I do agree with removing Shrewtooth's as well, because imo that one's not needed either

Agreed, this is not worthy of an alt. 01:16, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

Decline it then. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:17, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

In a way, that sounds like you are ordering us around. I do not think that we reached a clear consensus at this, as we have some people who agree it should stay up. 01:23, July 27, 2017 (UTC)