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Willowbreeze (Q) - For Approval
I added her yesterday, but somehow she was deleted. :P Anyway I know it sucks! Moon stream 17:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. It doesn't match her other chararts, so get the colors off of them. 18:04, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also, isn't this more than the page limit? 18:09, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, and she needs a gray nose. 18:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is over the limit of 35. 19:12, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's not now, and the others should have been archived. 20:25, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

blur the stripes more -- 00:06, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and enlarge it a bit more. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 02:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:49, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing though.Moon stream 17:46, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I redid her stripes, blured the shading, and changed her colors to match her other chararts. I can see some white dots, but I colored those in, hang on I'm still editing her.Moon stream 19:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay fixed the white dots, but the changes arn't showing :PMoon stream 19:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Now the changes are showing. Yay! I also blurred the ear-pink a little more. Hope it gets approved soon!Moon stream 20:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, blur the earpink more, and lighten the highlights. 20:56, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might not show.Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the stripes and the earpink and the shading. You should redden the earpink too. 22:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

And it needs to match her other chararts. It has too many stripes. 23:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might show. I'm not sure. It looks like they are not showing. I removed some stripes, and blurred everything.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 03:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are not showing!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 15:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay changes are showing, a little.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 15:23, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more. 22:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I added a gray nose, blurred the stripes, and removed some black smudge around her tail.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:46, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Willowbreeze.queen.png, and remove a few more stripes. 23:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try, but there are other willobreeze.queen images.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 01:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Then overwrite the images :] 15:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But the previous image always shows up, but I'll try!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:27, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I canged the name to Willowbreeze.queen.png, and removed a little more stripes. Hope it gets approved!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur ze highlights, especially tail and haunch. 21:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She looks a little dark compared to her Warrior image. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 00:30, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Her warrior image was not apporved yet. I copied her colors from her kit, and apprentice pics.Also, I won't be on start after this, not until tommorrow.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 02:06, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, there's a white pixel on the front right (our right) paw. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 12:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes aren't showing. :P I fixed the white on the paw.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:33, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more and round it; it looks a bit flat. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:00, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading a bit more, and blured it. Hope it gets approved!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't everyone? xD Lighten the highlights a bit, and blur them. 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing now.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:29, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back highlight a lot. 23:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur the highliht on her belly and left front leg, blur the earpink a bit. This looks friggin awesome by the way 8D -- 01:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thank you! I blured the earpink, and the highlights.Also, I darkened the shading, just tell me to lighten it if it's too dark.:D PS. The changes might not show. :P<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, blur the front left leg and belly highlight more, make it look smooth like the tail & haunch x3 -- 22:33, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the changes are now showing! I'm gonna re-upload it now.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 00:44, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes arn't showing. But i smudged the highlights.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 01:01, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

heheh, your gonna hate meh for saying this but blurr/smudge them some more xD Oh, and darken the very bottom of her belly and chest shading -- 03:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes are still not showing! It looks way better than this.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 04:57, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 04:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur / smudge the stripes into the pelt and make the whole thing lighter.Moonstorm88 10:19, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make what lighter? Her pelt colors?<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 16:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moonstorm, sorry but the stripes should not be smudged into the pelt, because it won't match the other images. 00:07, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes are not showing!!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 13:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now the changes are showing. So, should I smudge in the stripes? Or leave them? :| <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is coming along nicely! Also, do not darken the whole thing like moonstorm said. It's supposed to match the others x) Anyways, blur the front legs and back highlights(heheh..) and did you add the darker shading to the very bottom of the stomach & chest liek I told you to? I dont see any .-. -- 21:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:02, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing. I lightened the shading a bit, and added the darker shading like Blue said, (hehe) and blurred the highlights a little. Though, I won't be on during this weekend, :P so yea, I might be on, or not.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 03:13, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her stomache needs to be blurred a lot. This is looking great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But somehow the changes are still not showing! Just wait till' the changes show.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 16:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

She was mentioned to have the same forehead markings as Silverstream in CP. I think the charart should reflect that. Otherwise, beautiful. 20:39, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the front paw and back.` 22:59, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the shading just a teensy bit. 17:19, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Okay the changes ar not showing. I kept her forehead marking the same 'cause I based it on her kit image and apprentice.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 00:09, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The kit and apprentice chararts can be tweaked, but it was specifically stated that Willowbreeze and Silverstream have identical forehead markings. I honestly think it should be done. In any case, realistically, all cats have the tabby M. 00:37, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly's right. Honestly, it's a simple tweak for the other images. Moon, if you could do that, we'd appreciate it. =) 00:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes are showing! Kk, XD I removed the stripe and added the "M" on her.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:40, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading a lot. 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is really pretty ^^. Blur the stripes a tad more. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:58, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thank you! I blurred the shading and the stripes. But the changes aren't showing. :P <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 18:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Any more tips?<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:02, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading into the pelt and define the earpink. 15:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I defined the earpink and blurred the shading.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:13, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:38, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and also smudge the stripes into the pelt to give it a more natual look 22:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, it doesnt need smudging cause it needs to match the others. Again, this is coming along great. spread out the back & front arm highlights & blur em -- 22:55, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the bottom of the haunch. There is some waste in the very upper left corner. 01:12, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, something's wrong with Pixlr. And also, I won't be on today, only now(Dentist:(.. )<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:09, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 03:34, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights visible on her stomach. 11:30, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 21:44, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a few days, if she doesn't work on it, I can take over... 17:02, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I'm sorry! I was grounded! I got rid of the black smudge....My tablet isn't responding.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 00:01, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it more tomorrow. Is that okay? This is my first charart and I don't want to lose this.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 00:04, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blured some of the stripes, and the highlights. And I believe I thickened the shading at the bottom of her haunch. Any ways, more tips? Or is this approved?(crosses fingers! XD!!)<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:30, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading/highlights still need to be blurred a ton, and needs to be lightened a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The highlight on her back needs to be enlarged a tad, as well. 00:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the face aswell. 19:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: blurred the highlights and shading, and enlarged the back highlight. Oh and Paleclaw? Lighten what?<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:05, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the face so it matches the intensity of the ones on the front paws. Brighten the earpink, too. <span style="">03:53 Thu Oct 6

Re-Uploaded: Okay... Um I brightened the earpink and face. I hope this gets approved soon! I have way too much school work! :| --<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:40, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

If the month rule is clarified, then I think this will be approved soon. Nice work. 01:17, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really dark, can you tone it down? 16:26, October 7, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded: Thank's Ivyheart! Sure grayravenpaw, I lighted it a little. Just to match her kit and apprentice images, her warrior image is a little too bright. <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:35, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

That's Ivystripe, not Gray. He left. Lighten the base color, just a smidge. I think it's only a tad too dark. 19:53, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Oops! Sorry ivystripe!XD I lightened the base a little.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:35, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~For Approval


So here she is....People did this vefore, so I don't see why I cant, Once Fleck is withdrawn, this will be number 35. I took all colors from her Warrior image, this ish my first image....so comments? 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

NICE x) blurr the earpnik, smudge where the white meets the brown, and define the stripes -- 00:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She looks miscolored, take the colors from her warrior image. 00:09, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I did, sweetie, it is just I shade and highlight differ than Mosspool. I use Pixrl, I think she uses Gimp, thats all ;)

Anyway; Reuploaded. Thank you, Blueorca^^ changes aren't showing. (I think I need to blur the stripes, don't I?) 00:21, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Extend the stripes a little butm and blur them some on the legs. 00:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Butm? And this is the same stripe style on her warrior image. 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

The white from her tail is too far in, blend it a little better. -- 00:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * bottom, xD, sorry. 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She has a bit of white on her haunch on her warrior image, so I did that here. Or do I get rid of it?.... 00:56, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the warrior image is facing left, and loners face right, so they don't have to match that much. Blur the earpink, darken the shading, lighten the highlights, and blur them a lot. 01:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It just looked weird to me, but whatever. Define your light source so that it falls over the high and low parts of her muscles. 01:25, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think the white on her should be just a bit lighter.. So that we can see the shading and highlights. Mi st  y!  01:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? 03:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a bit more ;) Mi  st  y!  04:10, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a patch on her front leg/arm closest to us 05:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It isn't the same style as her warrior image. Splashpelt is correct. Extend the stripes or re-do them. 20:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll re-do it.(Well the stripes anyway. ;)) 23:18, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows that? 00:15, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

better. Blur the stripes, and it looks kind of 2D. Try using the regular loner shading (See Fleck's loner version under this one.) 00:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Due to the fact, my sister, Flowerpatch isn't on, I want to point this out; Ivystripe uses Gimp, Flowerpatch Does not. Therefore, she can't match the shading, sorry. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:40, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The fact that I have GIMP has no impact on that. I practiced doing the shading and looked at how loners were shaded, on the high parts of theit bodies you just don't add shading, and on the really low points you add extra shading. I could do it without layers. 14:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match her warrior image. Even if you and Mossy use different programs, you can still match it. 16:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Dips head* Okay, I will see what I can do. And Sis, Maple. We BOTH know, I hate it when you try to help me, and I've told already, to NOT comment on any images I do. Lets face it, you hate me, and I hate you. 22:20, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

All programs use the same basic tools, so you should be able to. ;D I use pixlr, and it works just fine. And, try to get along for the sake of PCA. :P I'm sure that if one of you was falling off a cliff, the other would save them. Lol. 23:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sis, Changes are showing now, darken the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:58, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * sighs* Fine fine, I'll try....anyway, Reuploaded, I tried to match the shading style. Changes aren't showing. 13:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think she has ginger on the front leg away from us, or on the back paw either. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, forever <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">flying 17:20, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you dont see the parts i added ginger to, so i did it anyway, she seemed to have more White than ginger, so I added more ginger. 17:28, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh hey, wow, changes are showing, what are the odds? ;) 21:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs farthest from the viewer 21:26, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:24, September 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * gigles* Is the image so good, you can't find a thing wrong with it? Is this why it lacks comments? ;) 02:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back leg seems a lot darker then the rest of her. I suggest lightening it. 03:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad on the white areas. 03:47, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Flower :) Right where the tail starts, where the ginger is, there seems to be a bit of color lighter than the rest of the ginger. 03:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gunger meets the white on the mzzle. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:43, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wow I can't type. -.- I meant Ginger, and Muzzle. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  08:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To make it more consistent, Move the left back leg patch to the top, take the patch on the left front leg off, and make the right front leg patch wrap around the leg. Moonstorm88 11:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, can you explain that? Like dumb it down. Not that I'm dumb! I'm dislexic, so is my sis, and she can't firgure out what you mean, so can you explain it for me? 13:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, is that what you meant? 00:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The changes probably aren't showing. What I meant was to make the back leg behind the pointed one put the patch on the other half of her leg but take the other one off. On the front leg, the one behind the pointed one, take the patch off. On her other front leg, make it so it looks the patch goes around her whole leg. Sorry for the confusion. Moonstorm88 01:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. Thanks, me and My sis, Flowerpatch, HATED the fact we couldn't figure it out, and it should be like... the....sixth one down, i think. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more stripes to the ginger patches, darken the shading on the tail and legs, and blur the ear-pink a bit more. 03:11, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- i added some smaller stripes everyhere and there, darkened the shading on the tail and legs, and blurred the earpink. comments? 17:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail. 23:35, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I made the tail highlight more visabile. Comments? 15:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC) Looks good sis! Just blur the shading a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:49, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- What else? 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the tail highlight. 00:22, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I thought i said this....the tail doesn't have a highlight xP. Reuploaded-Darkend the shading. Comments? 22:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ginger transitions. Looking good, Flowerpatch ;D Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:59, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- Thanks, Elorisa :) 15:21, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the shoulder and haunch highlights. 18:29, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the legs 21:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:45, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty sis! I see nothing wrong with her. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:58, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, please. I can't really even see any visible shading. 23:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest. 00:37, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-You guys are picky with the tail, 'define the hightlight.' 'Darken the shading.' your confusing me DX 13:46, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of highlights/a light color on the edge of the tail and hind leg. Looks good! <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  00:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It is suppoused to be there, my sis was told to match Fleck's highlights, so she did. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:30, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah there is blured lineart and also smudge a little bit more 22:33, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

@Santstormrocks no she doesn't need to smudge since it would create a continuity error. Please check the other pixils before suggesting something like that. 01:14, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sand, there is no blurred lineart, my sister had been very carefulr, there is not ONE pixil of blurred lineart here. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:22, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't believe that is blurred lineart Sandstorm. But, there's this little white line on the hindleg that goes farthest back, and it looks odd because it's pure white and has no smudge or blurring. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:50, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sand, let it be known, i took GREAT offence to that, Like Maplepool said i didn't blurr so much as ONE pixil of lineart here. Reuploaded. 02:14, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the highlights xD also the smudging between the white & the ginger seems to stop right around the lineart (if ya know what I mean) -- 05:00, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too red, please make it more pink. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:27, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I left the Ear-pink the way it was, i took all colors from her Warrior image, Reuploaded. 15:40, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the other versions better? Also, try blurring the whole thing more, really. 23:19, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the transition between white and ginger on the tail. <span style="">03:54 Thu Oct 6

Flowerpatch, it's been at least five days. Are you still working on this? Please do so, otherwise it will be declined. 16:31, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
This was supposed to be here because Cloud is withdrawn. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:18, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we weren't allowed to do that? Post a charart before the images are archived. I may be wrong, but I just thought one of the leads said that atsome point...... *shrugs* Anyways, fi it stays up, redden the earpink a bit and make it bigger. Looks great! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw! I edit conflicted with you 3 times over this. This will be declined and im tired of typing out why. 00:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Icy! XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But I was editing the same time as you, and Lakestream(?) is supposed to be approved. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:32, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is over the limit until something is acutally archived. 00:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's exactly 35 images. I just archived Lakeshine. 00:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. But for future reference, please don't post until the conflicting image is archived. Voleclaw needs a gray nose. 00:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything. 00:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, sorry but there was only 34 when I uploaded but I guess Iceheart beat me to it. :) Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  01:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. 22:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure if changes are showing and @Pearls what do you mean 'Blur everything.' Why does the nose have to be gray? Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  22:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

@Wild Sorry, that was when i wasant thinking. I apologize. 22:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading under the chin and blur the highlight on the chest; it looks a bit blotchy, darken the shading on the right side. 03:04, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail and blur all the highlights. ` 23:23, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

i thought voleclaw was black oh well. Nice job but the shading is blotchy blur it some. 23:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The right earpink looks smaller than the other. Also blur the forehead shading. 00:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just letting you know, you need to work on this or it will be declined. 00:59, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivystripe, yes I know. @CinderxLion, Nope he's dark gray ;) Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  21:56, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  22:08, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

there's something in the highlight on his chest plz fix that. And i know he's dark gray now. 19:33, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ` 00:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  21:16, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 00:36, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

The midriff highlights looks messy. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  00:11, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going on Vacation for a couple weeks so if anyone wants to take this over they can. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:13, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wildfire, why not just withdraw it? 17:55, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Saying that anyone can take over this means the same thing as withdrawing, doesn't it? 23:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it is. That's what Wildfire was saying XD. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:46, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over....Please? 01:05, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Imma reupload in a few seconds. It's gonna be good! 01:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may take over, no need to ask, just announce it 01:20, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay the place where the light is coming is from the left. Comments? 01:12, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is way too bright. Dull it down, blur it, and also move it up in allignment with the center of the ear. 20:06, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I thought it was a little bit odd. But anyways comments? 22:28, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink darker, but not too dark. 11:31, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Just darken it the slightest little bit 23:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks like it's hanging out of the ear, in other words its too long. 14:02, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's what I thought. But changes aren't showing 23:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

dull the earpink a bit, it's too bright. and make the nose darker. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and done 00:13, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the chest highlight so it extends over to the right more, and blur it. <span style="">03:57 Thu Oct 6

Extend the tail shading all the way up the left side of the tail. Also, extend the chest shading to the left side of the lineart as well for a correct lightsource. -- 01:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail (E) ~ For Approval
Here she is 00:22, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, blur the earpink, and she doesn't have a brown tip on the top of her ear. 00:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks blotchy, make the earpink triangula, wheres your light source? -- 00:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do everything in the morning. And the light source is like above her muzzle. 00:26, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. 00:28, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Seriously? I just had 4 edit conflicts with all of you. I think you should redo teh shading to make it less blotchy, and do the shading according to Nightshine's tutorial. Also, the earpink is blotchy. 00:30, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

If the light source is there, then there shouldn't be shading on BOTH sides of the tail & on the forehead -- 00:41, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

All the shading really needs blurring...and the tail is really blotchy. Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart 01:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Silverflower, there is no need to repeat what has already been said. 01:39, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'm just going to redo this, if I don't have it up by 9 then I won't be able to do it until tomorrow. Sry... 12:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED better? I have serious issues with ear pink XP 12:37, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, blur ear-pink Leaf-storm,14:02,September 10,2011 (UTC)

Better! thin out the shading on the tail & make the shading a darker tan like the others -- 15:55, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink just a bit more triangular? I'm horrible at that too x3 Mi  st  y!  16:06, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the face. This is comin' along very nicely! ^_^ 12:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED can someone help me thin out the shading on the tail? I'm having serious trouble with that. But that's all I need help with. Is this a dark enough tan or should i make it any darker? 16:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help! -- 16:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. 16:31, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded There ya go. Changes arent showin' yet x) -- 16:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thank you. 16:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  09:46, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I will not lighten the shading as I was told to darken it. Shouldn't this be approved soon? No rush but I haven't gotten a comment that needs reuploaded for in... 15:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

You will lighten the shading if someone suggests it. We're here to help you make this image the best it can be. It won't get approved (let alone a CBA) if all you're doing is being stubborn. Plus, the shading's way too dark anyways. 16:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * sigh* REUPLOADED Again, not trying to be stubborn or annoying but it was darkened so it would match the warriors charart. Arg...(i'm beginning to hate this image more and more) 17:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Now it looks better. It's an odd color to work with, if you ask me. Now, can you smudge the ear pink back into the ear? 17:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED is this any better? Arg, I has serious issues with elder earpink XP 18:12, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and smoothen out the shading. 21:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

How do you smoothen out shading? I've never really done it before, I know, it's sad ;\ 11:57, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

To do that, you can use either of these methods: You can use a huge brush and set the rate on 100% and blur it, you can smudge it then blur the smudge, or you can use the gaussian blur tool on a very high setting. This method works in GIMP, so if you use Pixlr, then you'd probably have to ask a Pixlr user (my method can work on Photoshop too since they're essentially the same thing) 17:30, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I use pixlr but I also use gimp XP But I won't have access to gimp until friday or saturday....I may just need to download gimp on this computer but I dunno :| so if this isn't reuploaded until friday or saturday that's because I didn't download gimp so yeah, I don't know... 18:29, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dull and lighten the shading. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 02:01, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REUPLOADED i dont think the changes are showing... 17:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:30, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED not sure if the changes are showing...anyway, this is as much as I can blur it on pixlr and this is the one comp that doesnt have gimp. Might have to download it though... 11:59, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

smooothe out the shading and blur it, make the shading a golden-tan color, make the earpink neat & triangular, and add some shading between the haunch and the front leg -- 15:28, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me do it again? I can do the earpink. And do you want the shading in the front or back. 12:33, September 19, 2011 (UTC

I can try helping you. But what do you mean by doing it again? Do you just want it blurred, or do you want help with just the general overall thing? 15:37, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty much the whole thing. And by when I mean doing it again I mean helping me with it again. Thanks. 16:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

So, redo the shading too? 16:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. 16:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, well here's the thing, if I redo the shading and blur ir for you, as well as the highlights, I might as well have done the picture for you. So here's what I'm going to suggest- I'm going to show you a picture on how to shade an elder. It should help you. After you do that, then I will blur it for you. Does that sound fair? By the way, this image should help: It's ok to copy off of them. 17:07, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

REDONE Alright I completely redid it. Not sure if changes are showing or not...also, I gave her a graying muzzle and i'm not sure whether that was a good decision or not... 17:27, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing and i dunno why its on the right side... 17:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Still doesnt look right... darken the shading and blurr it -- 22:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, changes STILL aren't showing, anyway REUPLOADED Ivystripe are you going to blur it? Could you blur this image, thanks 20:33, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, sorry, I didn't know if you wanted me to after you redid it. I'll blur it for you. 21:29, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded there you go =) I also fixed a miscolored pixil on the foot. Hopefully this helps! 21:44, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Iveh, comments??? 18:00, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:16, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh forgot to say that the changes aren't showing. So go to her history and see it. 22:21, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nicee 8) darken the shading & blurr it more. Also in some areas theres some uneeded/extra shading & highlights -- 02:16, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED alrighty i reuploaded but the image is on the text so can someone fix it, I can't seem to get it down....and the changes aren't showing, I think... 14:34, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it for you. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:22, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading some more...& make the ear pink taller -- 23:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the tip of the ear pink. 07:38, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Did it ever say she had a greying muzzle? Or is it ok since it shows her age? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 11:17, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I dont think we should keep the gray. look at the other chararts, they have really heavy shading. Take the color from it & try it to get it like that. If you cant, then I can help -- 22:57, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I REUPLOADED but the chanegs will NOT show, AGAIN. I think the gray is fine because she was getting old so...and if this isn't the shading I need help I can't seem to get it right... 12:19, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and to me, it's a little dark. 19:50, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

If the changes don't show, don't worry. Dull the shading and the highlights. Also lighten the earpink a tad. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 22:14, September 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REDONE again....ok I think this looks WAY better. I followed the directions on Ivystripe's chart above so try not to be criticizing about that. 11:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred and dulled, still. 00:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Does it look better? REUPLOADED  11:26, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make that smudged part by the legs less visible. 11:28, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Where? I didn't actually smudge anything... 15:04, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it, define the highlight on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:24, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 01:25, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing 

The shading looks like a whole other tone to the fur. Lighten it some, and give a curve to the earpink. 03:17, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's gone now. As Shadewing said, ligthen the shading. Also remove some of it. 11:34, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs redoing. Make it follow the curve of the ear, and make it pink. Then blur the shading tons. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:43, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and the shading is way too dark. Good job! 00:10, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone bring it back down from this, for some reason every time I upload it it goes onto the section. :| Changes aren't showing. Arg. 17:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

All you need to do it reupload it. It shouldn't be moving like that... 17:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah but that's what I did. But it still goes there. It's really weird.... 12:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights, and blur it where the shading and highlights meet. 17:51, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I never had highlights on it. REUPLOADED  18:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The, blur the shading a lot, and dull it. 23:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I've blurred the shading as much as it would let me and how do you dull it? 11:23, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Either use the burn tool and set it on a relatively low setting, or put a layer on top of the image and take a color that is a bit darker than what the highlights are and just cover it. Need help? 12:54, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please. 17:16, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So in short, I basically added a layer and toned down the highlights, and lightened the outer shading just a bit. Hope this is okay for you! 01:40, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is BOO-TI-FUL!!! THANK YOUUU! 13:51, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Much, much better. Define the shading on the paws a bit please. 01:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (A) ~ For Approval
I can't help but say that this is a fail. First tabby, second image. I pulled the colors from his leader image. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Put some dapples in to match the warrior and deputy art. 04:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; I added Dapples. Wait for Changes to Show... <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is not a fail, it's awesome! Add more stripes to the haunch and define the tail stripes. 04:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Thanks... <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This looks nice! There's some waste around most of the charart - a thin line. You can see it if you tilt the screen a bit. erase that please. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Niceeee. x3 Define the shading. 13:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Changes aren't showing. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 14:58, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The color almost looks kind of off to me. 21:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the base brown is too dark. Try lightening it just a tad. Maybe it's just the shading...but I don't think so. 18:23, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know the white muzzle is on his other images, but he was never described with one so can you get rid of it? <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

If it is too dark, in GIMP (or maybe another thing) you can go to 'Color' and then 'Brightness-Contrast..' and you can lighten the whole image without some serious work. 01:09, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights and this is good! 12:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Again, highlights are optional =) Just define your light parts (where it's not shaded) 21:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not being on. I'll work on it now. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 19:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. 23:38, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 22:27, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild  <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    22:45, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink maybe, and darken the colors on the tail or something so they match with the rest of the image. ;P 23:31, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the highlights into the pelt. I don't want to use blur because I think it's already been blurred a lot. Blur it if you can or smudge it. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  00:29, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

In all the updated versions, I cannot see the white muzzle removed. If you did, I am so sorry, but if not, make his muzzle brown, please. 01:19, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make is tail color resemble his pelt color. 20:46, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm going to be leaving the wiki due to a lot of work. If anyone wants to take this over, they can. :3 <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 21:01, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Changing the heading. If someone wants this, they may have it.If not, I'll decline it later. 05:19, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. 17:53, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah lighten it a lot and also more highlights goood! 23:17, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thin the stripes a bit more, define them within the highlights, define the mottles, and define the ear-pink. 03:47, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid it to match the leader. 17:30, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 23:13, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:48, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I can not see the earpink. Make it darker and define it. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:52, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:07, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. Blurring it less might help. 14:04, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's fine now. 17:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink more, and this will be ready. 00:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful image, Moon. CBA? 19:29, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt CBA D: but I think you need to brighten the earpink; I can barely see it at all. I know, I know, this contradicts what was said before, but I really can't see it. At least define it. <span style="">04:22 Thu Oct 6

Birdpaw (A) - For Approval
My gosh, it seems like such a long time since I posted a charart here. I know I've been a bit inactive recently, but I'm going to try and be more active from now on. And, I realise there is no ear pink, Pixlr was down when I tried to do it, so I'll do it on Sumopaint or something later. I just wanted to get the image up whilst there was a space. So, comments? Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have done earpink. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  09:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a lot. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the highlights more smooth. 15:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define your light-source, define the shading, then blur the high-lights and the shading. And take the ear-pink from Hollyleaf or Nightcloud. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She needs the scar across her eye too. 18:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. Mi st  y!  19:02, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She does not need a scar, as her scar is on her left eye. 02:18, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add earpink, and blur the highlights(hope Im lookin' at the right one) -- 02:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I was using the same eye as the kittypet XD 19:40, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink darker, it looks to bright right now. Take the earpink from Hollyleaf. 15:27, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Look up  to the past…  16:03, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Try to blur the ear pink a lot, and make the shoulder highlight just a tad bit bigger. :3 Mi  st  y!  20:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is blotchy...also make the highlights bigger. 23:36, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Look up  to the past…  07:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look like big bits of wet paper. Blur. And also blur shading.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 08:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a line at the bottom of the earpink that sticks out. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 15:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Try and blend the highlights and shading a little better, Leopard. If you need help, just ask. =) 05:20, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink out by blurring it. 20:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Leopard?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 02:09, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

If you are, the highlights are really blotchy. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 23:15, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 03:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry, I am working on it. I've just been so busy with school lately I haven't had time. Sorry. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  12:53, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights and shading way more smoother. They look very stiff. Also, there's some blurred lineart by the front leg closest to us, and darken the shading as well. 19:28, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Skyheart (A) - For Approval
Yep, here's Skyheart at her apprentice age. I'll blur the stripes more if I need to. 12:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I forgot tehear pink, so I added it. Changesaren't showing yet.

Very nice. Hm, lighten and blur the earpink a little. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

First of all, the heading should be Skyheart (A) - For Approval. Second of all, blur the stripes a lot x3 13:49, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add another stripe right where the haunch starts. This is great! 15:18, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the heading for you :) Blur the earpink as well, and define the shading. 15:33, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more light stripes, nice work! Leaf-storm,16:39,September 18,2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around the charart 21:22, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink -- 02:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add smaller stripes <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  08:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it when I get home from school.

Darken the shading a bit. 23:18, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it on Saturday. School, y u keep me busy? Dx

Blur the stripes. 23:30, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink.And theres waste around the image -- 01:25, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Added a few light stripes like Leafstorm suggested. I blurred the stripes a lot, defined the shading more, and instead of lightening the ear-pink I made it more pink than brownish-red. Changes should be showing.

Sharpen the edges of the stripes a bit. Looks better :3 <span style="background:#EAFAE8; color: #3DD5FF; font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;">07:11 Sep 25 Sun

Add some stripes to the back legs. Lookin' good ;3 12:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes on the back leg. I didn't know what you meant by sharpening the stripes, so I didn't do that. (Also, this is kinda off-topic. But can someone fix my siggy so the time part doesn't show?)

Sorry, I meant smudge the edges of the stripes so they look a bit sharper, and then blur them out so it's smooth. I dunno about the siggie, though. When mine was doing that, I just deleted the category and put it on again. <span style="">06:26 Mon Sep 26

Ok, before I do anything else, is there anything else that should be edited? -- 11:13, September 27, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the earpink a bit and blur it. 23:34, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it lighter and blurred it more. Changes aren't showing yet. -- 00:43, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The changes are now showing. -- 19:49, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Should I brighten the ear pink/make it look more pink? -- 14:51, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Make the ear pink brighter. Comments? -- 11:27, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are now showing. -- 19:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is way too birght. Tone it down and darken it the center it more and blur it. -- 00:11, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Thanks Cloudskye for fixing the ear pink, since it was being a pain. Comments? -- 20:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Anything? Sorry for sounding impatient. 20:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you take all the colors from her warrior image? The pelt, stripe, and earpink colors don't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I took all the colors from her warrior image Paleclaw. -- 10:48, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, nvm. -- 20:34, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (KP) ~ For Approval
My first image, what do you think? She has a KP name, so i made that image. Comments? Moonkitti 15:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm.. Blur the earpink 15:59, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good for your first image, round the bottom of her ear-pink Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. This is really good for your first image, Moonkitti! 16:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks guys! Changes aren't showing. Moonkitti 16:17, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She has got scar on her left eye but it doesn't matter, i think Leaf-storm,16:36,September 18,2011 (UTC)

I think that is her left eye o.O. Moonkitti 16:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! :D Define the tail highlights. And the scar looks kind of uneven o.O 16:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thanks, and that is because it is blurred. Moonkitti 17:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, changes aren't showing, it should be the 2nd one down. ;) Moonkitti 17:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Put highlights down the forearm, but not all the way to the bottom. 18:40, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The scar goes on her other eye. Her left, not yours. 18:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a bit more. Mi st  y!  19:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Moved her scar over, add a highlight to her forearm, blurred the shading and highlights. Moonkitti 19:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I was fixing some blurred lineart. Moonkitti 01:21, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch and the front leg shading please? (I'm a bit naggy over shading xD) Mi  st  y!  01:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink curve with her head, it'll look more natural. 01:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Did she have a collar in the book? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">The evil juggler! 02:13, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading/highlights to the eyes. 20:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, the scar is on the wrong eye again. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 20:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It probably has to do with the server. Sometimes, the changes will show, and other times they won't. 20:15, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Flossie looks gray. I thought she was supposed to be black.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:14, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights less circular. Think about the muscles where the sun is hitting. That should make it look more natural. 01:12, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

@Kittycat, It is just the highlights. Get right on it. And the image is the 2nd one down. Moonkitti 02:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

And I don't know, so....I just went along with it, i don't have the book, so I can't check, but I'd think not, so should I get rid of it? Moonkitti 02:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Got rid of the colloar, i messed with the highlights and shaing, made her look more black. Moonkitti 02:46, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Love it! Blur the shading and highlights. 15:23, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy and kind of bright. Take it off of an approved black cat, such as Crowfeather 21:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Having no collar sort of gives me the impression that she's naked, but oh well. Blur the part where the highlights meet the shading and vice versa at the middle of her body.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:23, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, Crowfeather isn't black, he is dark gray. Hollyleaf or Shadowstar Would be better. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:51, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot ^^; Yeah, take Maplepool's suggestion instead. 21:09, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-i took the ear-pink from hollyleaf. I've blurred as much as i can on pixril, it is having no effect what-so ever, can someone with gimp do it fro me? Moonkitti 16:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks brown. Make it darker...I can't blur it for you, since I use pixlr too. 23:29, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Moonkitti is spending the night at my house, and what looks brown? She doesn't know..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:30, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

The scar is above her eye, not vertically down. Other than that, very pretty. 13:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye, just wanna let you know, when it says 'over her left eye' it means like, it starts above her left eye, and comes down over her eye, likewhe she closed it, it comes down like that. *Btw this moonkitti, spending the day at Maple's house :3 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 13:08, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a brown streak in the middle of the back. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 16:00, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

No, in the manga, it shows how the scar is placed. 18:56, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I don't have the manga, can you show me a screenshot? Or give me a link to how it looks? Moonkitti 20:53, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye's right. It's a zigzag scar above her left eye. I looked myself. 23:12, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Gosh, i looks bad. DX REuploaded Moonkitti 00:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't. Just move it over a bit and blur it more. 12:12, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Lol, it looks like a pink eyebrow xD Moonkitti 17:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

LOL, wow Moony, only you, my nutty friend, only you xD XD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 17:28, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the scar. It looks like a blob of bubble gum. xD Very good job, Moony! 17:56, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

xD Cloudeh. Uh... define the highlights and blur the earpink. And make the scar like.. a straight line, because if you make it all swirly, (or like bubble gum xD) it might be blotchy. ;3 23:09, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I still say it looks like a eyebrow ;P Give me a few mins, and I'll mess around with it Moonkitti 22:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the scar; its too light. 22:25, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Moonkitti 02:02, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Give the shading depth and blur it. 03:51, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-*faceplam* Wow, I feel SO smart, i thought i uploaded this and i was wondering why i was never getting comments on it, and i can't blur it anymore, it is having 0 affect, can someone with gimp blur it for me?...Moonkitti 20:33, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hey...i don't wanna do this anymore, and I REALLY wanna do Yellowfang's Queen image. If this isn't taken, then i'll do it again, but I love Yellowfang....and yeah..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:50, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Eh..Shellheart's already doing Yellowfang dude :I.... - 20:55, October 1, 2011 (UTC))

MOONKITTI, You are DEAD! Just because you are at my house does NOT MEAN YOU CAN USE MY ACCOUNT WHEN YOU ARE TO LAZY TO GET ON YOURS!!! Your going home, NOW moony! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * rolls eyes* Fine, fine, Maple, chill. Gosh, stop over-reacting. Moonkitti 21:01, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, do not say something like that again. Not here. If I ever catch you doing this on the PCA pages again, I'll be reporting you. If you have a problem with her, talk it up with her on her talk page, or IRL. NOT here. Moon, are you officially withdrawing this then? I'm asking because Shellheart's already taken Yellowfang's queen image. 21:04, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

If she does withdraw this, I would like to take over.. *hungry look in eyes* xD Or are only warriors and up aloud to do that?? o.o (just wondering)  M  i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   21:24, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Cloudy, I just didn't want people to think I'm Moonkitti, i could have been banned for that, for doing nothing. And Moony*Who is still here* is withdrawing this, and Misty, i think you can, not sure thou. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:57, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Misty, if you don't already have something reserved, you may take over. Maple, I understand. Just don't do it again, 'kay? 23:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

So can I just post the image? If so, Reuploaded Hope I did the shading right! M i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   22:40, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the highlights, make them less circular and fit them better with the muscles. 22:45, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Expanded the highlights and tried to make them less circular, how does it look? M i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   23:06, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Niceeee :3 Define the tail highlight. 20:57, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you ^-^ Anything else?

Sorry, that was me xD ^ 23:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed. XD Could you make the eyes like say.... Mitzi's for example? It think she has proper eyes. Other than that I see nothing wrong. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:27, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cross-eyed? Oh well. I changed it, anything else? :3 01:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and make the highlights bigger. Try to make the highlights like Sharpclaw's highlights, or Jake's. 23:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the earpink and made the highlights bigger, but I was confused on your other (request, I guess xD) Should I totally re-do the highlights/shading to copy theirs? 01:30, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yo, heads up, I just wanted to let you know that we're enforcing the date rule on the reservation table. Please add the date you reserved this sometime today. 04:56, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, sorry about that, but I put the date on it. :3 19:45, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, and maybe you should redo the highlights and shading to copy it. Whatever you can do. 00:56, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Felt like I had to redo it, how does it look? I know the earpink looks weird, and I will change that on your request. 01:53, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and blur the shading. 20:10, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the nose needs to be a darker version of the pelt color. 20:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading, but I was wondering if there was any tips on how to dull the highlights without having to re-do them completely... But If I have to, I will. 20:36, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (A) ~ For Approval
Here she is. Not bad in my opinion. Comments? 18:34, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink match the leader image, and lighten the spots to match as well. 18:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading also. 18:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the highlights, and can you make the highlights on the shoulder just a tad bit bigger? Oh, and blur the ear pink. x) Mi  st  y!  19:16, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I was gonna do this image. Oh well x) Blur the stripes on the tail. 19:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the markings along the chest match the leader image. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I lightened the markings, mathced the earpink, and blurred it. I blurred the tail stripes and darkened the shading, and blurred it. I think I kinda made the shading worse. 07:24, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make her front paws a bit more darker, (match the leader image with it, make them brown I guess xD) and blur the shading. Mi st  y!  20:08, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I blurred the shading, but don't think changes are showing that well. 07:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

The background should be transparent. 23:15, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

When I try to make it transparent, even the lineart turns white, can somebody help me with this? 08:54, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

What program do you use? If it's pixlr I can help. 13:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it is pixlr. 13:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Just make the black transparent even if it takes away the lineart. If it does, add another layer of the apprentice blank and make the white transparent with the fuzzy select tool. 16:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Stoney, if you are uploading it from your PC, that's the problem. When you go to select a blank, you click on it, right click, and select "Properties". Once you do that, copy the URL (it'll most likely start was warriors.wikia). When you go on pixlr, select "Open from URL", then paste the URL into that box and click "Ok". 12:09, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Good. Try to make it look like the others and also make the ear pink smaller and more highlights. Where is the light coming from? 22:27, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink against the pelt. Sandstorm - What exactly do you always mean by "more highlights"? Do you mean brighten them? Make them more vivid? Highlights are optional, and it's the artist's choice if s/he were to use them or not. Cloudskye, for example, never uses them. xD 22:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

What's the fuzzy select tool? 06:08, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I tried what Ivyheart said, I managed to add a white layer with lineart, but I couldn't make it transparent, made the earpink smaller, but I tried to redo the eye, and fill in a white pixel, but I couldn't fill in some certain places, or use the paint brush, and I don't know why. Can somebody do this for me? 06:33, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and re-uploaded. 06:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the background transparent, blur the shading under her chin, move the highlight down her shoulder and tone it down, even out the shading on her back, and enlarge the highlights on her haunch and tail. 00:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to make the background transparent for you? 03:16, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yes because I failed to do it. :( 10:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I made the backround transparent and fixed the eye, blurred the shading on the chin, and enlarged the highlights on her tail and haunch. 18:26, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. 23:18, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I defined the earpink and shading, changes are hardly showing, are the highlights too bright? 17:14, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more around the belly and haunch area. The highlights are fine, just blend them in a little more. 20:34, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - well, I fixed the highlights, and defined the shading. The markings were blurred to much so I fixed that too.

The spots are a bit too dark, and this needs to be named Leopardstar.apprentice.png. 15:28, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Just define some of the spots. <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 17:44, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

The spots look a bit blotchy, so try to fix that. Also make her paws golden/brown to match her leader image. 20:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, major change in image 'cause the markings were hard too fix, and I thought the shading and highlights needed major blurring. So I redid the whole image. I think this one looks way better than the other one. I renamed the image, and the highlights didn't help me with my charart, so I used very little highlights, and I made the paws darker. 08:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and darken the shading and blur it. 23:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I think the earpink still needs defining 13:25, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

It does. Define it more, and it should be ready. 21:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Defined the earpink. 06:11, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more bigger and triangular, and it also looks as if its touching the lineart. 23:51, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (Ki) ~ For Approval
Gotta do this quick before the opening closes. Okay, I don't sync well with tabbies. This is a fail. Comments? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing 

Define the shading and possibly connect a few stripes to the other side of the lineart. :3 20:17, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes smaller, curvier, thicker, define the earpink, and darken the shading. ` 20:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but what exactly do you mean by connect the stripes? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 21:41, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think connecting the stripes means to commenct the small stripes to form thicker stripes. 21:43, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. 22:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink & define it --

Make the stripes thicker, and less of them. Darken the shading a bit too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:02, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I will get to that as soon as I can. I'm redoing the image. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:37, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Please produce the revised version soon, ok? 01:08, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - A thousand apologies. I was so busy, I had absolutely no time to work on it. I still hate it. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 19:31, September 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the stripes, define the highlights, shading, and earpink. And add a stripe or two to the hind leg. ;) 23:07, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the stripes a bit longer. 02:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Any better? Changes are not showing. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 22:10, September 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Nevermind, they are showing xD. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 22:16, September 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The stripes still don't quite match her other chararts. Make them thicker, longer, and darken the whole thing. 22:22, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes not showing. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 19:21, September 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing 

Define the shading some more. 20:00, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a little longer, and define the pupil, it kind of looks like she's blind, or has no cornea. :P 02:15, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Does it look any better? I feel like it's getting worse and worse. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 22:17, October 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the pelt color. 15:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate this friggin' charart. It's a piece of crap. >.> Sorry for my grumpiness, it's been a long day. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:47, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Heads up, we are now enforcing the time table rule, so sometime today please add in the date you reserved this. We'd greatly appreciate it. 05:02, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Sorry about that. I always forget. xC Senbonzakura ''' Dance of the Cherry Blossoms...  19:39, October 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
My first charart! Yay! Picture: Darkstripe when he was described with a dark gray pelt. Comments? <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. And take the amber eye from his warrior image :3 22:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, so this will have to be declined. Sorry. :( 22:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is the right number now. Define the shading on the tail. 22:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the back leg (the one far away from us) needs shading. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">!  22:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :) Make the eye pupil (the black part) bigger. Also have less shading on the tail tip, or put highlights. 22:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is a female blank, use a male blank. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:46, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll improve it. Sorry Maple took the wrong blank <:3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know if the changes are showing yet... <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:54, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't he already HAVE an alt? Or is that for the black pelt? Also, blur the shading. 22:59, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the pupil and reposition/ blur the ear-pink. 23:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

@cloudskye Black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

He already has a black alt. This needs to be a silver tabby. And I fixed the title for you. 23:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There are actually four alt decriptions of Darkstripe: black, gray, silver tabby, and black with silver stripes (opposite of his real description). Pick one of the three that aren't done. 23:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll do silver tabby, since I already started that :P <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:23, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing he needs an alt for is being ark grey. He is everything else already. Ill decline alll the others. 23:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm confused :( This is a dark gray alt. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:48, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Nevermind, I'm just sticking with this. This is a dark gray alt, not a black one. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  00:04, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sotty. You had just originally said that he was black. 00:17, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kind of small.. Do you have the right sized blank? (or is it just me x3) If its the correct size then blur the shading a bit more. :3 Mi  st  y!  00:33, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I never said he was black! And the changes aren't showing yet. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  01:09, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah fix the highlights and darken the ear pink Good for a try! 03:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yay the changes are actually showing. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  11:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink by blurring it. It's too blotchy. Also, lighten the shading on the paws/legs. :3 12:57, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the title for ya ;3. And darken the highlights. 15:24, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  15:48, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

make the ear pink bigger and darker and also turn down the higjlights on the body and make the one on the face brighter too 22:25, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

center the ear pink <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 01:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are fine, Sandstorm. They just need to be to be blended with the shading more. 05:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur hightlights around a little, good work. I'm working on the silver tabby now. :-) Leaf-storm,20:00,September 27,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry, forgot to say re-uploaded before xD <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:40, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights and define the earpink. 22:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  16:15, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it just a tad more. And maybe try and make the ear pink a tad lighter. Other then taht this is beauitful. Though if you have dodge you can use that to lighten it. Just a helpful tip. :D Rain  face &lt;3 18:55, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing yet. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  19:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 19:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  00:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and lighten the shading on the chest. Looking good! 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good, blur the neck shading (if any, it looks like it though) a tad more. Rain face &lt;3 19:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n21:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight. 22:54, October 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Other than that, looking good! 08:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! :3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 22:10, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still looks blotchy. Try blurring it a little more. 20:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, his shading is kinda covering the shoulder highlights. Please define the highlights on the shoulder where the shading is covering it. (a lot of words, and yes, i speak fast and type fast :P) Rain  face &lt;3 21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (Ki) ~ For Approval
Finally! An opening! Minnowkit was approved, so I sprang for the next available character, which happened to be Silverstream's kit. Comments? <font face="Papyrus" font color="#4271d6"> Twilight <font face="Chalkduster" font color="#3366FF">&lt;3 Mangos, Volleyball, and Horses 05:13, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute! :3 Define the shading 12:16, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Adorable! :3 Lighten the nose a bit. 12:56, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Re-Uploaded 14:01, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Try do make the nose gray not black and add some swirls to it 14:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm... that made no sense :P Define the shading a tad more on the paws. 15:56, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

She's meaning make it look like the old queen, she must not know we re-did her queen images. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:12, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Yeah, they re-did the queen, Sandstorm. Just check. Kept the tabby stripes the same, made the nosepink gray-ish, Defined shading on paws. Wait for the changes to show

Define the tabby-M on her head. It was made a prominent feature in CP, as her forehead markings match those of Willowbreeze. 17:35, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 17:45, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

darken the highlights a bit. Looks great =) <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  00:16, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I forgot the highlights in this charart, so I can't necessarily darken them ;3 I thought it looked kind of good without them after I saved it... :P 00:36, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make her stripes like that of http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Silverstream.warrior.png And make sure you make her tail-tip black like on her warrior image as linked above. Also her highlights/normal pelt and her shading are wayyyyyy too seperate and defined.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 09:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 22:58, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to match her other chararts. 22:03, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not working on it...Twilight's a bad girl...Anyway, I'll work on it now. 20:51, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded The new stripes are smaller and I lightened the shading a tad because I couldn't really see the new stripes... 21:08, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty Twilight. Rain face &lt;3 22:33, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. =) 22:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

@Rain Thanks

@Misty Will do, I just need to finish up with my school work before I do that. 23:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changes ain't aren't showing yet~ 16:33, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Sorry, Twilight has a tendency to say ain't. If I ever say it, excuse me... =(

Define the earpink, and make the stripes thinner. 00:42, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will, but at the moment, my computer is being fixed, and I have lost the pen to my tablet. I'll work on it soon. 20:33, October 6, 2011 (UTC) Also, is it just me or is the font looking a bit big? =(

Thistlepaw (P3) (Ki)- For approval
*Sigh* another long haired solid..... <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 19:59, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Cute ^^. Lighten the shading on the tail. I can't tell if he has blue or green eyes. 20:43, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I took the eye colour off his apprentice, they're like an aqua colour. `<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks

Blur the shading on the tail and possibly on her back (the right side when looking at it) Nice work. 03:18, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 10:48, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 22:24, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 10:44, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

This iz beautiful! Put a little less shading on the tail. 05:14, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

^ I agree. If not, define the highlights on the tail, I can barely see them. Hoping I'm not a derp and there are no highlights... :3 22:12, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

You're not a derp. There are highlights xD Anyway, Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 23:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make sure the two earpinks are the same color? When people add shading, for example on this one, they shade the earpink too, and then the two earpinks seem to be different colors. 23:25, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

They are the same. I put the ear pink on top of the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 23:37, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's nothing wrong with the earpink. Erase the waste around his left paw. 21:06, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 22:31, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be short haired. -- 18:01, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It says that he is a long haired white tom. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks, cybermen 20:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I believe Iceheart is right. WindClan cats are known for being fast and sleek, and Thistlepaw is in WindClan. Naturally, he should be shorthaired. 21:11, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yet his page says he is long haired, so I think it should stay. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks, cybermen 21:12, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

WindClan cats are usually sleek and shorthaired. It's different when a cat is mentioned with a long pelt. It should stay the way it is. 23:36, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, we decided the shorthair would be the DEFAULT for WindClan cats. If it mentions otherwise, then it should be made longhaired, no matter what Clan he's in. Anyways, lighten the shading a bit, it's kinda dark. This is great! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:23, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's not that great.....<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 10:47, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Did you change it to a shorthair? In the file history, it is only showing longhaired versions. 22:51, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Skystar doesn't have to change it to shorthaired. He is longhaired and i agree with that. Blur the chest highlights. Rain face &lt;3 23:23, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sticking with the long hair because it's in his description. If he wasn't described as long, i would change, but he is. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 02:14, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

It stays longhair if that's what he was described as. Darken the shading ever so slightly. 03:31, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Allons-y! 02:14, October 8, 2011 (UTC)'''

Lilystem (alt.Q) - CBA
Comments? 23:15, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

The right eye is messed up 23:59, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

kewl, blur the earpink more & try fixing the eye if you can -- 00:00, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Misty. Redden the ear-pink a tad and make sure that the stripes go all the way to the tail lineart, there's one stripe that kinda looks like it's just floating there. xP 00:05, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and give her a gray nose. 00:05, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Blur the stripe on the haunch that is closest to the tail. 03:14, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Pretty! 05:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

There's 3 white dots on the image. 1.One of her toes on her front paw closest to us is not filled in 2.There's a white dot among her black belly lineart close to her back foot 3.There's a white dot among the lineart on the base of the haunch (on top of her back foot). And all the suggestions above xP- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 05:55, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also her eyes look a bit too neon and unnaturally bright, but I may be wrong. I'd darken the eyes a bit and make them more natural, leafy-coloured if I were u, but meh. I'll see how many disagree/agree with me. This is great, Misty!- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 08:15, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly. Very nice. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:42, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I got the eye color off of her original queen version, and did the eyes the same way, though... ` 22:00, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I just redid her eyes as blue, since this is an alt, and I like blue eyes on gray cats. Comments? 22:17, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, blue eyes on gray/silver cats are awesome. Anyways, back to Lilystem! Can you blur the earpink some more? 22:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:28, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading over the haunch, it looks pretty :3 01:12, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty, can you darken/add shading to the front leg closest two us? Rain face &lt;3 01:18, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 22:52, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Any chance you could dull the earpink a tad? SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 01:54, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded. ''' 21:54, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Just darken the shading a tad. Nice job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:19, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 20:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
My first charart. I don't think it's good. Comments? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  3:25, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the markings to match her other images. Color-pick it off directly, it should help 03:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 04:43, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the base pelt color to match her leader image. (Wait. I think my eyes are playing tricks on me. I dunno...) 05:24, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Use the female kit blank. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:28, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the shading more. 11:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now I think there are two options to the blank, you can either re-do it on the female kit blank or add the eyelashes yourself. Also, the spots need to match Leopardstar's leader image. This is really cute! 12:45, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

It'd be easier to just add in the eye lashed, or add a layer that has the female kit blank on top of it. You don't have to redo it. Darken and emphasize the shading. :) 12:50, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color a little different then the pelt. 21:39, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The spots are brown, make them gold. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, match all the colors and designs from her leader version. ` 22:44, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also want to mention that I did color pick the colors off her leader image, so I didn't change the colors yet. It could be just the shading and the highlights, but I don't blame you. At least the main color is. I need help doing this. Do I have to re-do it? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to, since I don't think you can change the spots without redoing them, and they need to be golden... 00:53, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah they look sorta like the warrior and deputy except a bit lighter. It would prob take less word to just re-do it.. 17:16, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded hmmm.. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  02:20, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

On her leader charart, it shows her with golden/brown paws.. Can you fix that? Mi st  y!  13:15, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The paws were already colored.. looks better now anyway. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 02:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 04:13, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  00:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job so far! But can you make the right ear pink a bit more triangular? 20:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall

00:00, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the spots just a tiny bit darker, make the spots on the chest more round, and brighten the earpink a bit. I really like this! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and the highlights are blotchy. Blur them so they're smoothed out. 22:22, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I need to blur the shading and highlights more, but I'll wait. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 06:28, October 7, 2011 (UTC) Yes, the shading and highlights are still a little blotchy, so blur them a little more. Other than that, this is looking good! 06:42, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) ~ for approval
Comments? 22:28, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see your version anywhere in the upload history. 22:32, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Dapplecloud DID upload it, Define the ear-pink, Blur highights, give him a plae belly, and fill in the white pixil on his hind leg farthest from us, and define/darken the shading, then blur it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:35, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I thought you were supposed to have YOUR version at the time of upload, as an image like ths got declined in the past. Upload your version soon, Dapplecloud, or I think this may get declined... 22:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

She did upload her own image.... 22:39, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

She did after my comment, which it won't get declined now. Blur the belly and make it like his aproved MC image. Make the earpink bigger and less neon. 22:41, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now I reuploaded it. Sorry I forgot to until Ivystripe mentioned it. 22:50, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Don't make the belly too pale. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..   The colors of fall 00:00, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to look like his MC, Owl. In fact, I think the color for the belly is just fine. However, can you blur where it meets the base color? 06:57, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, it just looks a bit awkward. But that's kinda what I meant. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 00:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The base brown is too dark. Use #8E6235, which is the base pelt color for his medicine cat image. It looks awkward for a few seconds, but once you get used to it, it's not all that bad. 02:42, September 29, 2011(UTC)

Lighten the main pelt color. 06:38, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneclaw, that's what I told her to do, if you had read my comment. =) 06:39, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. 16:49, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:22, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. Fixed the title for you too ^^. 00:45, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks!:D 03:54, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, Dapple! Blur where the pale belly and the light brown meet a little more. 03:59, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Beatifully done! Enlarge and define the earpink. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 01:53, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''the pale belly is too peach match the warrior image. otherwise awesome job. <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 17:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded  22:27, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pale belly a bit and tone down the highlights. Good job. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The bottom herb looks neon. Make it a paler green instead of the pure green color offored in most image softwares. 03:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (Alt. W) - CBA
Comments? 06:53, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. =P 06:56, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing Rainey! ^^ Yes, like Cloudy said, darken the shading. And aslo brighten the earpink and lighten the eyes a tad. Nice job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:58, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I <3 white cats. :3 07:04, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. You forgot to add "For Approval" on the heading, so I added it for you. 17:02, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the chest highlight rounder, and the tail highlight bigger. 22:24, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights. Looks great! <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  01:07, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. It looks really cool and shiny! 03:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:29, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

And darken them a bit. They look pure white. Highlights should never be pure white unless you're putting the layer mode on overlay afterwards. 18:15, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:53, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, amazing! Blur hightlights more! I love your cat ♥ :-) Leaf-storm,13:44,October 3,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could on pixlr. 12:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Rainey, the only thing I see wrong is the shoulder shading could use a bit of blurring. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 11:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, dear Rainey. CBA? 20:07, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspelt (A) - For Approval
Whoot, got on just in time to get my charart up before the space was filled! 8D Anyways, comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:38, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but the patches are too smudged. Blur them more, to match her queen version. Also, I think you should add a white chest or something, because though her queen version doesn't have one, she is tortie-and-white in the CP manga. 22:41, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

make the patches smaller & blur them slightly -- 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changes aren't showing. You;ll kow they're showing when she has white on her. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:12, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! The white needs to be desaturated, though. It seems brownish-white. Lighten and whiten it. =) 23:32, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Both of those things were because of the shading. I used color shading, not black, so that's why it was like that. I desaturated it, but I'm not lightening it. That would mean lightening the shading, and IMO this looks too flat as it is. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:38, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty ^^. Make the shading a bit more visible on her back legs. 00:36, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. 01:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the paw's white fur a bit more whiter. It looks gray. I looks great! 04:10, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the haunch highlight a little. 19:58, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink slightly more. 20:05, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink looks fine, but artist's choice whether to tweak that. All I see is perhaps make the smudge marks go the same direction but that's optional. :3 Awesome! 16:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

There should be some tan on it. You can barely tell on the queen version but its there.... 04:50, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't decline this, I'm having hard-drive issues, so my files are being transfered, and my hard-drive's being reformatted. I won't be able to access my files for a couple days. I WILL get working on it ASAP though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:49, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay, my computer's up and running again, but the actual issue wasn't fixed, so we may need to reformat it AGAIN, so don't be surprised if I post on here again saying thta I won't be able to work on it for another couple days. But for now, I'll work on it as much as I can. Anyways, I did everything above except make the white whiter. Dapplecloud, I already said I'm not changing the white. I added the tan, but you can barely tell. But that's how it is on the queen one, so I figured it'll be fine. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:03, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can see the tan. I also did it faintly on the warrior version. This is coming along great. 01:16, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt Q) ~ For Approval


Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:52, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Adjust the shading so she looks a bit less flat, and define the ear-pink a lot. 22:53, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded.

Then who? And, to clarify, I meant that the shading should follow her body mass, not go in a straight line across her entire body. 23:00, September 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * faceplam* Sorry, that was me Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:58, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make the shading according to her bones and outline of her body rather then just a line. 23:06, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Mostly they need to follow the rise and fall of muscle mass, not exactly bone. Look at a tutorial on how to shade a queen. The earpink need to be bigger. Add depth to the eye. 23:25, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:00, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, i would check out some tutorials on how to do shading and highlights on queens. Use Mistyheart's tutorials if you use pixlr or nightcloud's if you use gimp. there are other tutorials, though i use those two primaraly (i know it is spelled wrong, i was never the best speller) Rain  face &lt;3 00:03, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded, better, worse?.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:27, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and darken the shading toward the bottom; give it some volume. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes less grayish white looking? 04:44, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more visible 11:37, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, i can't get the shading to look right. Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 15:46, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I messed with the shading, and i got this.....idk, it lokks better. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:05, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make sure to add highlights since she is described as sleek. 17:23, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I gave her highlights! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:25, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten them, blur the shading, enlarge the earpink a tiny bit, and add shading under the chin, along the neck. 18:46, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:49, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

No offense, Maplepool....But I think this one is worse. The shading is WAY dark, or the base color is WAY light. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 12:05, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It is the highlights, i was told to make her look sleek, so i did. *shurgs* I'll fix it, if you like, but i was only doing what i was told. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:34, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add some highlights on the paws and make the face highlight bigger. 14:53, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I followed the shading tutoiral for the queens.....should I change it?.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine unless you want to change where the light is coming from. Either way, make the lighter shading/highlighta (if you use them) the same...color I suppose, and I'd add highlights or whatever you use to the chest. Nice work! 16:52, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

............What?......The highlights are.....I'm confuesed.......help....DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 17:08, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:36, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart by the haunch. Blur the highlights and shading. And darken the highlights. -- 18:24, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:36, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Uploading again, trying to get the changes to show. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:18, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights a ton, dull the highlights, and add a lighter part to her forearm. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ CBA
I'm so happy the vote passed and I can do this. Comments? 23:38, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! You use GIMP, right? Add depth to the eye. 23:49, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little dark and the scars don't really seem to match, but that could just be me. 23:56, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added depth to the eyes. Yes, I use GIMP. ^^ And I think it just looks dark because queens have more shading, but if someone else agrees I'll change it. And I think I lined up the scars right. Do you mean they're in the wrong places or that they're different colors? 00:02, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and thicken the shading on the back and on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:47, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

You dirty little....I can't beleive you beat me to the opening..... This pic is pretty good...I can't find any fault...  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 12:01, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Reddened ear-pink, darkened tail shading. 17:15, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps just add a little depth to the scars like on Tigerstar's alt. leader image. Looking good! 17:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

You really think I should? I just made them to match the latest warrior image Icestorm did. If you think I should, I'll put the warrior image on the tweak list to add depth to the scars there as well. 18:11, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should. If it's OK, I'll tweak her, since I hvae her layers, but I don't see the need to put her up for approval again. 18:13, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, thanks Icestorm. And I meant I'd put her back on the list, not that I'd take over the image myself. I can't, as I'm working on Tallstar right now. 18:18, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, okay ;) Can you blur the tail highlight? 18:19, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Reworked the scars to my liking and gave them depth. Also blurred the tail highlight/shade. 16:07, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Did you smush in her face? It looks like that, otherwise...Blur the shading a bit, and it's very pretty!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:32, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I did. She's persian, after all. 23:07, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you blur the haunch and chest shading more? 23:09, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. changes not showing. 17:41, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

this looks AMAZING! Rain face &lt;3 21:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up a bit and blur it. this is AMAZING Shelly! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred it to death. Huzzah. 19:37, October 6, 2011 (UTC)\

Gawjus Shelly. Darken the earpink just a little bit. 19:52, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Don't think I should, Snow. I took the color off the Medicine Cat image. 19:55, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 20:05, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Ki) - For Approval
- I like this one. I'm pretty sure this is OK, since Ivyheart withdrew Blackclaw. So. Er. Comments? 23:48, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Coolio. Define the earpink some more. 00:14, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It might just be me, but it looks like the shine in her pupils are brown instead of white. 00:19, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where was Sandstorm mentioned as a kit?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 03:15, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where was Tallstar? Where was Onestar? idk, they are just getting them. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:16, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Warriors App, I do believe. 03:17, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart, I looked closer, and they are definitely white. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 12:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. 19:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Shading's fine, Silver. However, you should blur it a bit though. 01:33, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 22:20, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 22:50, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt. MC) - CBA
He was mistakenly called mottled, I never really picted mottled as "spotted", so I smudged it a lot. Hopefully nobody posts another one right before this xD Anyways, comments for approval? 00:22, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I wasn't sure if I should give him a pale belly or not. I can upon request 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should, it is part of his desc, even if he is mottled xD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:32, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded for the waste, and alright. 00:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and also I found out that I don't have to, but I thought it'd make it more interesting. *crickets chirp* It's been pretty quiet around these parts lately xD 03:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and make it smaller. Also darken shoulder shading and blur it. 21:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded finally a comment! Lol! =P 01:38, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the top of the earpink a tiny bit. The reason you have no comments: it's practically already perfect <3 <span style="">22:34 Thu Oct 6

Reuploaded Wildy you are too flipping nice! =)  23:00, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Colleen calls 'em how she sees 'em, Ivy. CBA? 20:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Flight (PH) - For Approval
I love this xD Comments? 00:37, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes, make the mud a lighter color as it looks like shading, darken the back foot unless that's supposed to be mud, add depth to the eye 00:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define her stripes. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:19, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink -- 01:21, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, you don't need to repeat what I've said. It's just a friendy reminder for the future, ok? 01:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights and darken/define the shading on the head. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add a stripe to the back of the ear, it stands out from the rest of the body. 04:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this version better. 20:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is really cool. Define the mud a little more, maybe to do that make it more reddish. 23:22, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches in all directions instead of make it in a straight line. And I'd say take the mud color from an approved cat, let me see if there is a similarly colored cat with mud on it. 00:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make it look more like her queen. 17:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Loudsplash, please be more specific. Like her queen how? The color, the stripes? What exactly do you mean? 19:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

It does look like her queen. I took all the colors from her queen image, and I tried my best on the stripes. 21:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the stripes. 22:41, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for reuploading late guys, I'm just so busy these days! 19:40, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks look pink. Make them brown. 21:15, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (Ki) ~ CBA
Snowdazzle withdrew it. So, how's he look? I made the tail a little longer then it should be on a kit, since that's part of his description. 01:04, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! There is waste all around the charart though. Also, bur/smudge the patches a little more. 01:17, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:32, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading (if any) on the white areas. This is lovely! :3 01:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's still waste around the charart, and this is amazing. :3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n21:39, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. Can you lighten the white parts? They're too gray. 21:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? It's just sitting around, and it looks great. 20:01, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Floss (Q)~ For Approval
Comments? 01:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and blur the shading a tad more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

A note: The shading is especially blotchy on her tail. Also blur highlights, and the nose isn't filled in. Also is the ear furthest from us filled in, or is it just there's a lot of highlight on it? It just looks unnaturally pure white to me---the original blank colour.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 07:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 22:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose pink or gray (either one, I believe xD), it looks white. 02:05, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the nose can be both gray and pink in their corresponding areas. 15:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The white on the head is pure white, and looks like it doesn't have any shading to it. 19:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

You can have pure white, its not against the rules. The ear pink stays how it is, and reuploaded- 22:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

She's probably meaning to say that the white brightness doesn't match the other white parts. (Like the highlights) 23:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, Ivy. That's what I mean. I wasn't paying attention when I typed that. 12:33, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink just a tad. <span style="">22:36 Thu Oct 6

Reuploaded- O already said im not changing the ear pink. 23:09, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I can't see the ear pink; only a streak of light pink. Iceheart, you don't need to change the color at all, just make it so we can see it. 19:51, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

So what exactly do you want me to do? The colour came from the other chararts so its no changing, and its the same size/shape as every other queen ear pink... 02:38, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 03:03, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should try for flecks over spots of ginger. 11:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

It's manga alternate, we can made them? References says Lost Warrior page 11 Leaf-storm,12:49,October 4,2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Leaf, we can, Mapleshade got her alt. rouge, and she was said to be a tortie-and-white in the manga of CP. Define the ear-pink a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:05, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on her leg. Moo  nstr   ike  13:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think you may have missed a spot with your shading going outside the lineart, it appears underneath her paws. I'm sorry, I know it's a bit picky D: Also, the markings around her eye stands out a bit, can you blur them a little? This is very nice! 15:23, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

To clarify what I said earlier, I think you should make her look a bit like a reverse of Weedwhisker. 17:33, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Outstanding. Stunning. No. This will stay, unless the artist wishes it not. I only see that you need to lighten the shading. 20:58, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:07, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Redden the earpink. 21:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights on the face. This is looking epic! Rain face &lt;3 23:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:30, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

the highlighting on her chest stands out to much against her really shady pelt. you should blur it. other than that, this is EPIC<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;"> Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;"> like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 04:12, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:27, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Comments? Moonkitti 17:23, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

You can't have more than one image for approval at the same time, even if it's on CBA. This will be declined. 17:33, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't, she withdrew Birdpaw's KP image, Mistypebble is working on it now, Moony isn't. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 17:39, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the light part on her arm shouldn't be facing away from the light source. Itshould be on the front of the arm. 17:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The were talking about broken star not her. she doesn't get an al. This will be declined. -- 19:19, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Then, should we remove it from her trivia? So no one else gets confused? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

""The question should be, what can I do for you?" the former ShadowClan leader replied. He paced forward into the center of the clearing, and the cat behind him followed. As the brown tabby emerged into the light, Ivypool drew in a horrified breath." There. They are referring to Blossomfall, because Brokenstar was already in the clearing when Blossomfall emerged from the shadows. It stays up for approval. 19:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. If Brokenstar led the cat into the clearing, it was not Brokenstar. This stays. 19:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Uhh.. I have this reserved. 00:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, shoot! I just realized I meant to put it on the chart, I had only said it. My bad. 00:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

rename this Blossomfall.warrior.alt.png. 00:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur it where the shading and highlights meet. 17:53, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Her eyes look purple, can you fix that? Also, blur the earpink. 19:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blend it with the highlights (if you use them). 19:43, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnbright (Ki) - For Approval
Ok, i was little confused with Darkstripe but its ok, I start working on this cat today's morning, ok this is my work...its my first kit Leaf-storm,19:02,October 4,2011 (UTC)

Pretty, darken the shading. Rain face &lt;3 19:12, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Awwwww <3 she's so cute Define the ear-pink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:20, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Blur where the ginger and white meet on the belly, please. 19:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

And the tail as well :3 20:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail a lighter gray. 20:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little...neon. Did you take the color from her warrior? It seems a bit off, I apologize. But the color is a bit hard on the eyes. It's very cute though, don't get me wrong. 20:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color the same as the other pixils, I don't think he was described with a different eye color at any time, so I'm pretty sure it should be the same as the main ones. Also lighten the whole image, it's a bit dark now for dark grey, it looks almost black. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, there was an edit conflict, and I copied the wrong on of my posts. XD Anyways, it seems like the ears are lighter than the rest orf the image. Is it just me? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:46, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened shadings, defined ear pink blurred white and made something with tail and darkened ears, comments? Leaf-storm,11:04,October 5,2011 (UTC)

Epic! Blur the shading on the back paw, the paw farthest from us on our right, it's left. Rain face &lt;3 18:13, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlight on the tail. Looks great! 22:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,11:38,October 6,2011 (UTC)

Tone down the brightness of the ginger a bit, so it matches the warrior image. <span style="">22:37 Thu Oct 6

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,11:39,October 7,2011 (UTC)

DEfine the shading, it may just be me, but I can hardly tell where the light source is. 12:43, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval


Ok, second charart. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:15, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, noticed i forgot the ear pink, i'll fix that. Rain face &lt;3 19:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Add nose-pink, blue the highlights, and make them smaller, make the shading larger, and define it, and blur the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, is the black supposed to be shading? If so, please lighten it and blur it. It looks like a whole other tone to the fur. The nose should be dark gray, since Blackclaw is a black cat. 19:24, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur, blur and blur some more. Also, did you get the eye color from either the warrior or elder images? It seems a little off. 19:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this one was a TOTAL fail. gonna re-do it so i can make the shading right and... yea. Everything that you guys said. Rain face &lt;3 19:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Crud monkies! forgot to blur. What else will i forget today? Rain face &lt;3 20:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 20:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better ^-^ Now make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 22:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Take the pelt color from one of his other images, this is a bit too light. Looking great though! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 01:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at it for a REALLY long time (actually, it was only like, 30 seconds :P) and I can't find anything i could complain about. it looks purrfect:P<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 20:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the nose needs to be darker than the pelt, so it should be almost as dark as the lineart. Also, define the shading and blur the earpink more. 21:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks bluey. '''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 23:01, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur blur and blur more (the shading. Everywhere) 01:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 02:22, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to lighten the shading, it looks blacker then it should be. Blend it in with the pelt some more as well. 22:41, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image a bit; right now I can't even tell the lineart from the pelt colour. <span style="">22:40 Thu Oct 6

The shading looks weird. Blend it with the highlights. For an example of a black kit, look at Hollyleaf's kit image (remade by me, funnily enough). 19:50, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (alt.K) ~ For approval
Comments? 22:25, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Redden the earpink some :3 22:53, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly darken the eye color, awesome job! 00:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color the same as the other pixils, I don't think he was described with a different eye color at any time, so I'm pretty sure it should be the same as the main ones. Also lighten the whole image, it's a bit dark now for dark grey, it looks almost black. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading & the earpink on the left seems brighter then the one on teh left, idk if its the highlights or not x) -- 01:27, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading some? I'm having a little difficulty seeing it, but it could just be my computer (if other people disagree with me then just ignore my comment) 03:45, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

No, i agree, i am having difficulty seeing the shading also. When you define the shading, blur it. Rain face &lt;3 18:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Same here. Also, make the ear pink, well, more pink. 19:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur where the shading and highlights meet. 15:34, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit unnatural.. Can you make it more triangular and less blotchy? 19:19, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt L2) ~ CBA
Okay... let's do this. In CP he was described as "fox-red". Red is a type of ginger. Pinestar is brown. Therefore this has a right to be an alt. Just incase anyone had doubts. Okay, I just realized I forgot the nose, I'll add that in in a second. Comments? 01:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Epic, maybe darken the stripes alittle - 01:26, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing, you know if the changes are showing if you see the nose. :P Darkening stuff is fun. 01:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

...Never mind that. Changes are showing. Yes, I darkened the stripes. 01:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The nose seems a little too...pink. Darken it, please. Good job, otherwise. 01:42, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:16, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 23:55, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 22:28, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
Well, I tried right? 02:16, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

No offense, but the stripes need to be blurred badly. There is waste all around the charart. Define the shading a tad please. 02:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I tried to match the kittypet and deputy version, so whether I should've blurred the stripes remained a mystery to be so I left them as they were. So do you think I should blur the stripes with that in mind? :) 02:20, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, they are hard-edged and pixilated. What I'ddo is blur them on an incredibly low setting. That is what I did with Goldenflower since she has such thin stripes. 02:24, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. M'kay, done! xD 03:24, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

His other images have stripes crossing muzzle and eyes. You should have this match those. Also, the color looks a bit off. 03:27, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

the stripes still need to be blurred a bti more. And make the stripes on the head get thicker in the middle and thinner at the ends, they're not supposed to be just straight lines. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:29, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done :3 01:52, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more visible. 11:57, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh, I played with it, but I got the color from the kittypet version. 22:17, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt. W) - For Approval
Here he is.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 02:00, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ehh..I dont think we have a cite for that trivia, do we? Oh, and save it as a png next time -

No, we don't i think this will be declined, but if you can find a cite for it, then it will stay up. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:06, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

If this stays up, then you need to make the scar the same color as his earpink. 02:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

It it does stay, add highlights to the chest, face, and haunch. Also add shading to the back, haunch, and legs. Rain face &lt;3 10:19, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken tne ear pink Leaf-storm,11:42,October 7,2011 (UTC)

When I did this, it was declined, so this will probably be too. 11:56, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Fine a cite for this, and it stays. Otherwise, it will be declined. Just because it's on his page, doesn't mean it's true. 19:47, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I left a question on Hawkfrost's talk about the white mentioning back in July, and it has yet to be linked. You better go back and find the reference, or Cloudskye is right. This will be declined if nothing is found. 02:09, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (Q) - For Approval
ok, every time i put this up there's too many, but i'm hoping this one isn't a mistake and there really is room for it. anyway, hwo do you like it?<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;"> Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;"> like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 01:33, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, the ear farthest from us should be brown, not white. Make the white on her face closer to her eyes. Add a light part/highlight to her haunch. And yes this will stay. Nice job on this so far! 01:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading...a lot, especially on the hanch, tail, chest, and face. Also make the transition of the white and brown smoother by blurring it. Desaturate the earpink a bit and darken her eyes. Possibly make her stripes a bit larger too. ;) 01:39, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Atelda, you made me edit conflict about three times D:< Define the shading and enlarge the highlights. Extend them as well in the appropriate light sources. 01:43, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also turn the ear brown, and make the grey parts an almost white. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Allons-y! 02:11, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redo the stripes to match the warrior image, and use the kit image as a reference for how the white should look. 02:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)