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=Tweaking=

Willowpelt (Q) - Tweaked
OA was Bramble. I re-did the shading, and the eye color didn't look like her warrior one, so I made them more alike. Comments? 23:43, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know you didn't tweak the earpink, but can you blur it please? Nice work on the shading. 23:49, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I forgot to thank/mention Atelda for teaching me how to redo the shading. :3 23:52, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 99.89.95.201 00:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - ^_^ 00:11, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me up there. xD 00:12, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the non-shaded part on the belly over the the left and brighten the earpink. 02:16 Sun Nov 27

Re-Uploaded 05:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

And make that highlight bigger - 02:22, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 20:55, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfur (W) - Tweaked
Watch out peeps, Im on a roll with solids right now BD

OA= Warrior&lt;3 05:04, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Er, what needed to be tweaked? The shading? Anyways, make the earpink a bit smaller and define the shading on the tail. Awesome, Bloo! xD 05:28, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Yep, same as all the other solids before. pssshh, finally a comment - 05:46, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the earpink a bit. This is so prettyyyy <3 08:03 Mon Nov 28

Re-uploaded - 00:08, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (E) ~ Redone
OA was Dawnfeather with tweaks by Night Shine and Oblivion. Needed to be brown, comments? 01:03, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. 01:20, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There is some gray lineart on the chest and the paws, can you fix that? 02:16, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the base fur colour just a tad. 01:21, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lilystar (L) - Tweaked
Ehm, hello? Its me agin, I tweaked Lilystar, blurred hightlinks and darkened shadings..hmm it looks a little like redoned shadings o_O Oh and Darkhallows is OA 18:40,November 28,2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and neck shading a lot, and possibly tone down the eyes. 20:41, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the end of the haunch and white pixels on the tail, paws, and on the left side of the cat. 00:23, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, reuploaded 10:11,November 29,2011 (UTC)

Erase the smudged lineart on the haunch. 02:04 Wed Nov 30

Its not smudged but i made somethig different, i think now it isnt looking like it 07:15,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Jumpfoot (W) - Redone
I got permission to re-do this, and I noticed whenever I make a charart I hate, then put it up, everyone LOVES it. Original artist was Hawkfire, with tweaks by Sandstar, Brambleclaw, and Bramble. Comments? 23:35, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lol <3 Lighten the base coat and darken the shading. Darken the earpink a tad and blur it. Pwetty. 23:41 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded I was right. 23:47, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste :3 I know, so well thought out, right. 23:50, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I thought I already erased it. 00:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Missed some between the legs :3 erase that. 00:10 Tue Nov 29

Reuploaded Oh. 00:18, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define/lighten the shading. It's a bit hard to see. 01:13, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Green eyes, Moonleaf :3 01:20, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The eyes were green, but oh well. 18:07, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (SC) - Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this, 'cause no matter what I did (colourizing, dodging, whatever) it just ended up turning bright yellow or neon orange -_- I preferred the old version. But it did need to be pale... so comments? Oh, and the OAs were me and Scarlet 00:56 Tue Nov 29

Lovely! <3 Define the light on the tail, and define the earpink. 01:03, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded mreh 01:32 Tue Nov 29

Darken the stripes i can barley see them. 03:45, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (DF) (W) - Tweaked
That shading has been bugging the living daylights out of me since the day it was approved, so I redid it. OA was myself. 01:45, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit. Well done. 05:05, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:38, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Barkface (MC) - Tweaked
Just tweaked the shading, it was blotchy. OA was Icethroat21. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:36, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 01:06, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

And can you blur the ear-pink. 17:46, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt. W)~ Redone
The only thing that was passable about this image was the shading, and i made it before i used layers, so it was too hard to tweak so i redid it. Comments? 00:16, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit redder and blue it a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 01:49, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit. You already know of my feelings for this image <3 <3 <3 02:02 Wed Nov 30

Reuploaded- Got the ear pink off the chart. 02:12, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the bottom of the haunch a bit. Beautiful. 03:49, November 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded- Thanks. 22:15, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine; redone to match her other images. 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the stripes a tad and blur them? 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 00:50, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and blur the shading on the belly. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh darn, I was kinda hoping to do this one. Oh well I've got plenty of images on my to-do list. XD Anyways, great job! Lighten and desaturate the whole image just a bit though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's this big patch of yellow waste near her tail, so erase that. xD 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and there's patches of yellow waste on her head, above our far front leg, and along her back. 02:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, they look brown like the pelt :3 02:58, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes lighter still. 03:31 Wed Nov 30

Whispering Breeze (Alt. SC) - Redone
Okay... I have been absolutely dying to redo this. The stripes looked all weird and the shading could've been defined, not to mention, I just hated it... OA was me. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:00, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

-squints- OA looks to be Nightshine to me. 02:54, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I remember when Scarletwind had this up for approval o.o Darken the shading a little. 02:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion, it's mine, I, being a total derp, had named it Whispering Breeze.alt.sharclaw.png or something like that. This is the renamed file made by Night Shine. ;P - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste on the back. Just a hint to help avoid waste - if you "lock" the alpha channel (the pixels without any colour on them) then you'll never have waste again 8D 03:43 Wed Nov 30

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:10, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Leaftail (W) - Redone
Dunno why he wasn't on the list, he's a WindClan cat. Needed to be shorthaired. OA was Icethroat21. Comments? 02:44, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and define the ear-pink a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:53, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:59, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes - 03:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Noooo I disagree don't blur the stripes they're beautiful as they are. This is an amazing image. 03:59 Wed Nov 30

Shouldn't his eyes be amber? 16:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh derp, last time I looked he didn't have one (or I was just being silly) 17:07, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:50, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes (I should say eye because there's only one visible eye, but oh well) more amber, they look yellow. 00:04, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Just so you know, I'm not counting this toward the time as eye color change only doesn't get an image on the tweak page. 02:21, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (E) - Redone
Had to be pale and match sharpclaw image. Comments? 03:28 Wed Nov 30

Define the ear-pink a bit more and I think I remember that she had a graying muzzle. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:43, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded derp how did I forget the graying muzzle. 03:50 Wed Nov 30

Make the gray more noticable - 03:59, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Fritz (KP) ~ Redone
OA is Moonpelt1786, and I got permission via IRC from Iceheart to redo this. I must say, he looks smexy. <3 05:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

He does look smexy. :3 Define the shading. 05:37, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does the darker shading look better, or, should I stick with the lighter? 05:44, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should stick with the darker shading. Make the nose a darker pink, it looks odd standing out like that. 23:30, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:33, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes look purple. :3 00:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the white part of the eye should be on the other side of his pupil. 00:18, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not changing how the eyes are, Oblivion. Every user has their own style. I did change the color though. Re-uploaded. 00:27, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And I respect that. However, because the light source is coming from the left, the white in his eye should be on the left as well. 00:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And that's where you're wrong. I do not have a light source. ;) 00:39, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

...yes you do. Since the shading is very clearly on the right side, it's coming from the left. You can't not have a light source. Light has to be coming from somewhere, unless it was pitch black, in which case you wouldn't be able to see him anyway. 00:44, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, I do not. All I do is trace the lineart with black, and blur it. There is no light source. Trust me, I know what I'm talking about. 00:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail (ki) ~ Tweaked
I just added the needed stripes for this little ginger cutie. :3 And yeah, I did base the pattern on his face on the pattern shown on the cover of Night Whispers. OA was Bramble with a tweak by Moonflight to make him long haired. Comments? 20:59, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Awww! Is it poosible for you to make the earpink less orangey red? Hey Shelly....  Penguiuuuiiinnn.....

Re-uploaded. 01:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (e) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. OA was Mintstarr. Comments? 21:28, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Minnowtail (W) ~ Tweak
Her shading had to redone, and she had a lot of blurred lineart. Also had to re-do the earpink. 21:37, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink some? It's kind of hard to see 21:46, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the earpink. 22:17, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (E) - Tweaked
Here she is! Original artist was Flamingomom/Hawktalon, and it needed to have shading and earpink redone. Comments? 23:27, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is really hard to see. It should be the same color as the skin. Nice work. 23:43, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wait for changes... 00:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (W) ~ Tweaked
OA= Mousetalon and it needed to match the MC. Don't tell me to change stuff on the pelt because I put the warrior blank over Ivystripe's MC version! :3 Comments? 00:21, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, would this be considered tweaked or redone? Because its a whole new image but I just used the MC version under the blank... 00:22, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It would be considered tweaked. I see nothing wrong anyways. (I'm glad you didn't make the same mistake as me, cheating by erasing the herbs... -.-) 00:36, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Erm no, this is still art theft, as you used my image and just put a new blank over it (what I was planning to do) You need to do all of this image yourself and it would be considered redone. 02:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lionheart (D) - Tweaked
OA was Icecloud33. He needed thicker fur around his neck. 00:38, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Jingo (Lo) - Tweaked
I think that this should be redone, but it needed to be more brown as it was looking a bit greenish. Original artist is Darkhallows. D= 01:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink tad. 01:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the eye colour. I don't think it should be redone, but mainly because I like the stripes. ^-^ 01:46, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

The chin looks like it has some blurred lines. Also, the missing tail-tip looks like the lines are sort of thin, could you thicken it by about one pixil? I've always liked her, she looks like my Hickory only shorthaired :3  02:18, December 1, 2011 (UTC)