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Patchpelt (W)- for Approval
Take him down if he's over the limit, but I don't think he is. I think he's one of my better ones.Echoheart 11:45, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

The patches on his back and chest don't look much like the ones on his elder image...well they do, except on here they look very much connected, whereas his elder picture's ones are a little less touching...does that make any sense? Also, you might want to add a patch on his front leg...one the elder image you wouldn't see it if it was there. Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  15:38, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hello Echoheart! This is really good! There is a little grey smudge thingy on the patch that covers his face. It might just be me but if you can see it then I knoww I'm not going blind like Jayfeather! XD! Fawnstorm 16:48, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs blending and I can't see much shading. ∑✐+ᖱ = ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ  17:06, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is there anything else? Echoheart 20:40, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter like his elder image-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:30, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

...Don't know if you saw my comment above there ;) Heartpath  Love, Jaggedclaw!  01:50, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

About your comment Mosspelt, which front leg? And about the image, it's reuploaded. Echoheart 11:52, February 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'd say the front leg closest to us. The patches all need blurring a little more and the shading isn't visible on the white areas. ✐S  aN  dY  11:40, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Echoheart 19:06, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the patches (do not smudge them out just smudge the patches) then blur them more. Icestorm 17:12, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about this? Echoheart 11:39, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Anybody? Echoheart 23:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, darken the shading on the white fur just a tad bit more, I can tell it's there butI think it should be a bit darker. -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 00:18, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Now what? Echoheart 11:19, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink smaller? It looks a bit big. XD! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 10:39, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made the ear pink smaller. Echoheart 16:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be me, but I still can't see any shading... ✐S aN  dY  09:40, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to make the shading darker. Anything else? Echoheart 12:04, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink a bit brighter? If you do that, I don't see much else that needs doing! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Anything else (again? XD) Echoheart 14:46, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Anything? Sorry, but I'm a really impaitent person. Echoheart 11:14, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks gray, make more pink like his elder image. Darken the shading on the white parts, and blur the patches a lot more Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:48, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Also, on the white, it is kinda hard to see the shading. A hint for shading on the white: eithe make it a really pale gray, or take the burn tool, set it on highlights instead of midtones, and make the exposure about 5. The image is coming along though! Vancou verpath  01:20, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Try adding a few spots in the white part, and the earpink looks grayish. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:29, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changed the color of the white to more of a gray. Echoheart 21:01, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little fluorescent, try making it more natural, or rosy instead of really pink pink. Vancou verpath  01:18, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changed the ear pink. Echoheart 11:48, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone? Sorry again.Echoheart 11:23, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the patch on his tail, and the very tip of the front paw farthest from us is lighter than the res of the shading. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:13, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the patch on the tail and fixed the shading. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  23:34, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

There one white pixel on his belly, where all the black is Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:57, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Filled in the pixel. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  00:46, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Quince (KP)- For Approval
I hope I'm not going over the image limit cuz if I am I'll take it down and put it up later. Well, here she is. How is she? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 23:10, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit. There are two discussions.--  Night shine   ♥  23:26, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

There are three discussions up so this in within the limit. Blur the shading and highlights more. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:38, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink darker. And add shading to the ear and paw that's not facing us. Icestorm 23:43, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops I didn't see that. Blur the highlights and shading.--  Night shine   ♥  23:54, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's this? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 00:08, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks magenta. Also, Blur the highlights and shading more. But this is good for your first one! Maplefern Carrying the torch... 20:52, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I redid the shading and highlights. Earpink too. This good? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 22:19, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

She should have a collar LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 00:21, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights more. Icestorm 17:07, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Her right arm seems too dark. Lighten it a bit--  Night shine   ♥  23:05, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I fixed the shading, highlights and arm. I'm having trouble with the collar. Any tips on how to make it on pixlr? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 22:33, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I suggust making the collar in paint then coloring it in pixlr. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:44, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I think it'd be easier to do it all in pixlr, but of course it's your choice. If you do it in pixlr just take the pencil tool on 1 or 2 pixel size, and just... draw the collar. X3 ♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 04:35, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad.  Saint Ice   ♣  02:10, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I just started over and made it a whole lot better. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:11, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's the collar look? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:20, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit thin and the tag needs to be smaller. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:22, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: thickened the collar.

The shading needs more blurring--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  00:40, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Try and copy the collar on the kittypet image. User:QuailflightTheCat ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ We are the World...05:43, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: blurred shading and fixed collar. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 15:13, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. Sorry but it dosen't look that.........natural. If you see what I mean? Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:53, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: better? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 16:24, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Listen, you're having some though time on the collar. Plus Quince was never a queen. i'd just do the kittypet version. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ We are the World...05:42, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, she was a queen. In "The Rise of Scourge" she had given birth to, Ruby, Socks, and Tiny, who later became Scourge. So yes, Quince was a queen. But, collars are hard to draw, especially on queen blanks. I agree with Quail, try doing her kittypet image if you like Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:46, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

K I'll try...-- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:17, March 2, 2010 (UTC)-- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 14:55, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:How'd this turn out? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:58, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, this is the first time I've critiqued on a Kittypet Blank, but I'm pretty sure the ear pink should be slightly darker (As Quince is a gray cat)... Otherwise, I think this is great! =D

Shistar Mai Talk Page 22:03, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: darkened ear pink. How's this? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 22:08, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I cant really see the earpink now. Choose a reddish color. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:42, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded: fixed eapink. Better? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 23:04, March 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Blur the shading on the tail and back. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:29, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How does this look? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 02:29, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well...how's this look? HELLO? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:00, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Calm down, people will comment when they can and its only been a day. Add more shading to the haunch and blur the shading and highlights. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:59, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's been a little longer than a week, please work on this or it will be declined Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:11, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I have a question. I redid her and I was wondering if I had to add highlights or not. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 14:55, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

No you dont have to add highlights, but, you need more shading around the shoulder and haunch. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W)-For Approval
Here she is! I know she dosen't look much like her Medicine Cat image but I'll happily improve it! Her eyes are copied directly off her medicince cat image and her scars are in the same places (thanks for your advice on that topic guys!). The Featherstar thing is a disscusion thingy so this is the 35th image. Comments? Fawny 14:19, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think that this is the 36th image. If it's not you should lighten her pelt a little. Haikage Ash's Talk 14:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I got the colour from her Medicine Cat image. And Timberfur has got CBA so shall I keep it on or take it of? Fawny 14:59, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well I would say take it off because as far as I can tell Bramble doesn't want more than 35 images on the page( the message at the top of the page). I'm not really sure though. Haikage Ash's Talk 15:03, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ruby's got CBA as well, so I'd think it could stay. Image-wise, the eye is freaking me out, and you need to darken the ear pink/scars and blend the highlights more. ♪  B  a  t   ♫  15:13, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

There are a good amout of images that would be taken off later today, i'm just going by the notice. It's not my call so image-wise there is a white pixel on her chest. Haikage Ash's Talk 15:16, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, Ashshadow, Fawny's right. The Featherstar section is a discussion, so this should be kept. Also, Swiftpelt withdrew Tallpoppy, so this technically is the 34th image. Anyway, I think her pelt could be lighter, as she is dark gray. You can take the pelt colors from the medicine cat version. Rain whisker  16:19, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I took the pelt colour from her Medicine Cat image though and her eyes to. Fawny 16:25, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred her ear and scars but didn't change the eyes. It was like that on the med cat image. I took the pelt colour from that as well. I know she's a dark grey cat (fave) but I did get it from on there. Fawny 16:31, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

To Rainwhisker: Ruby was archived and approved after I made that comment. The earpink is rectangular make it a bit more triangular. Haikage Ash's Talk 17:56, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Fawny! ^^ To get the darker grey colour, maybe add some more highlights on the body, tail and face, like on the med cat image? And then smudge the body ones together if need be. The tail highlights look great on black cats if they're used like on the med cat image. I love the scars! ^^ Brightfrost  of SunClan...  19:12, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

She still looks very black to me, lighten the pelt more Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 22:17, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I am going to withdraw her guys. Sorry. Misty says that Yellowfang was never a warrior in the books so she said I should. I will carry on if anyone disagrees but I don't think you will. Sorry again. Fawny 19:53, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Well she might not have been seen as a warrior but it was mentioned in BP that she was a warrior before becoming a medicine cat. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:06, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, and Flamewolf is doing Hawkheart's warrior image, but he was never shown as a warrior, just mentioned to be one. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:58, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

So what should I do? Fawny 10:06, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah! Ravenpaw was never seen a kit, but was mentioned as one! Yeah! Unfourtunately, I don't care anymore. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:37, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't say she was never a warrior and I didn't say she should be taken down. I just wanted to know when she was mentioned as a warrior (Thanks Ash!) She's really good, but the eyes look strange. I know you copied them from the med cat image, but I think you should use Icethroat's tutorial for eyes. :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 12:55, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind. I'll change the eyes! <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 12:59, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did the entire thing. She's now a dark grey, got the right eyes, her Ear Pink is less rectanglar. Anything else I missed? <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 16:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

You missed a white pixel near her neck :) Otherwise I see nothing wrong :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 16:40, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I have redone it but it won't let me reupload her without keeping the white pixel which I changed. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 17:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded did it. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:02, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Also please take note to the message on my user page. Thanx <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:41, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Her scars need to be a darker pink to match her medicine cat image. Also, her pelt should be more ragged, but this is very good. :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 12:14, February 27, 2010 (UTC)


 * The ear pink is too pale for a dark grey cat. Either make it a darker redish colour or make it more of a greyish-pink colour. Reddish is probably easier. ✐S  aN  dY  15:38, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more :D <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 17:45, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

How do I do that? I'll darken the ear pink, I see what you mean, Sandy, thanks? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:09, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make her eye color more orange-like. Do you think you could make her fur textured like her meddie cat image?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  20:00, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I had a go at making her look more textured. Dosen't look that good though. -sigh- I will withdraw her if you think I should <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 16:29, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Don't be so hard on yourself. I like the way you textured her fur. As for the Image try to blur the earpink some more. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:36, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'll give it a go. I think her med cat image was done on GIMP and I use Pixlr. Thats why it looks weird and dementated. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 10:04, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:41, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the smudges and the ear pink. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:31, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

All I can say is maybe make the ear pink that weird grey-pink from the med cat image and blur a bit? Apart from that, she looks great! The raggedy-grey on her pelt looks great :D Brightfrost  of SunClan...  19:08, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Petal (KP) - For Approval
I need to know how to shade this. Other than that, comments? Critique? Critiquents? My fourth image, and first kittypet. Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 10:35, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Just like you said the shading otherwise its pretty good! Moonpelt1786 14:22, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean by saying you need to know how to shade it, but I'll explain two different ways.


 * Using the burn tool, set the range on highlights, and it will show up on white.


 * Run the tool along the back, the legs, the edges of the head, and the bottom of the tail.

Does that help? Bramble 17:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Is that the shading? It looks like she has stripes. The shading needs to touch the lineart, and to be blurred more Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:54, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes if your shading this dark most of the time you need to blur it with the blur tool. Moonpelt1786 04:52, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedҖ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 10:06, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is still really really dark, try lightening it and blurring. Look at some other kittypets to see how they're shaded as this style isn't very connected. Haikage Ash's Talk 11:35, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, blur the shading and make it more smooth and connected as the others said. For an example of what a light colored kittypet's shading should look like, try Snowdrop. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:34, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 03:56, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

She doesn't look anything like her queen image, as a matter of fact, she doesn't look like her description either. She looks white, not pale gray. And the shading still looks like stripes. Make her pale gray, and lighten and blur the shading a lot. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:59, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

I copied the pale gray colour from the queen image. Will reupload on Tuesday.Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 06:30, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Rubeupluboadubed lol. Reuploaded.Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 05:04, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear pink is too bright, and there needs to be more shading near the base of the tail. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:36, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, her earpink is HOTPINK. Make it a little paler. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and Crystalpaw, instead of typing "Crystalpaw *glimmer*" just type  Җ Ѭ  ѳ ѥ  ѯ 07:45, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Very good Lightning! Make the ear pink like Whitestorm's and the shading needs a tad more blending. (: Icy Invading the fire 20:27, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 05:14, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more and make it smaller. Can you also add more shading?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:41, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 09:31, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still isn't right. try the style used on Snowdrop, Cloudtail's kittypet image, or Lily. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:38, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this can only be reuploaded after a couple of days as my PC got formatted, and Photoshop is gone. Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 04:51, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart on the top of the head is blurred. OMpath 3rd Place! 14:56, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) For Approval
I was so proud of my Shadepelt as an apprentice! So I decided to go on doing solid color cats! Like it, or love it? I think it would look better without shading also. And I think I went over 35, but... Don't take this down! Please! Take someother useless message down! ♣Silver thistle  05:22, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading quite a bit! <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 10:07, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Silverthistle, you didn't go over the limit. But please don't call the other chararts and discussion parts on here useless. As for the image, Fawn's right about blurring the shading, and she needs eye white Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 10:08, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear was nicked as an apprentice so should she have a nicked ear in the image? Haikage Ash's Talk 11:51, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Do you all think i'll get it approved soon? Blurred shading ,don't think nick is needed and I don't know how to make a nick on an apprentice, also crossed out words ♣Silver  thistle  14:08, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

She really does need the nicked ear..-- Dark hallows 14:26, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added nicked ear ♣Silver  thistle  15:28, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the nicked ear. -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 21:19, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thickened nick ♣Silver  thistle  03:34, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  19:52, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Silver but the shading on her chest is really dark.Lighten it a bit or blur it. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 19:55, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened shading ♣Silver  thistle  22:03, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

The Ear Pink is still a bit dark. I can't see it that well. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny

Reuploaded Lightened ear pink and made more visible ♣Silver  thistle  22:40, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry again Silver but could you make the ear pinka bit lighter? Really sorry! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 09:11, February 27, 2010 (UTC)


 * I swear my screen resolution is messed up as I seem to be seeing things differently from everyone else on a lot of images recently. Sorry for the premature CBA call (again). I'll try and sort that out... ✐S  aN  dY  09:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Its okay Sandy! I just saw it when you put CBA up! Sorry! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:50, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened ear pink. Also, I will be gone from the dates March 5th-March 13th, so don't expect me to do anything between and on thoose dates. ♣Silver thistle  16:23, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I can't comment below Snady's comment. I should have noticed what I said earlier. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:09, March 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * No need for you to apologise. 'twas my fault. ✐S  aN  dY  15:55, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:38, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

By the looks of it the light source is coming from us. Apply some more shading to the legs behind the other legs. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:21, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect! Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 18:33, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading a bit more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:51, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) For Approval


I'm back with a new charart! And (luckily) this one is about 1,000 times better then Icicle. This is 37 but 22 of the things were discussions so technically this is 35. I just want to say thatnks to Ashshadow for some great advice and help and to al of the turtorial authors, you were very helpful. Anyways, quistions? Comments? -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:11, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. <font color="Lime" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:green">Saint Ice 23:23, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? i learned an important lesson for the next time I do a tabby:shade FIRST! Then you can do the tabby markings. -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:40, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I put it near the top again. The shading needs some more burring and the stripes need to be thickened a bit more--  Night shine   ♣  01:41, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

You're actually supposed to do the stripes before shading so that everything is shaded equally. In addition to what Nightshine said make the stripes a little longer. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:44, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Gah1 I accidentaly deleted the file! It migt take me a while but I'll get her back up soon.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:47, February 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm going to have to disagree Ash - I always do my shading first and use the burn tool to add stripes resulting in the same evenly shaded effect without the overblurred stripes because of trying to blur the shading. Anyway, this is good Artimas, just make everything more polished. Make sure there aren't gaps in the shading, so it looks consistent, and make your stripes a little thicker. ✐S  aN  dY  22:42, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I forgot about burning the stripes on. My comment only applies if you paint the stripes on. Did you check your recyling bin for the sandpaw file? Haikage Ash's Talk 02:25, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas, if you just save the image from this site (Right click the image above and select 'save as') then you can get it that way. For the image, I can't say much that the others haven't already said, so, yeah. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:34, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

You guys are life savers! I'll be back in just a minute. Hopefully.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'm back. i tried to do everything you guys said. How does it look?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:38, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are a bit too dark and I dont see that many stripes on her tail. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  03:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is this good?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:19, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone comment? Is this good or not? I'm sorry, I'm just really impatient and I can't wait until my first charart gets approved! :D -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:35, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes darker on the leg farthest from us. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:06, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Is this dark enough?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:00, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit SQUARE, was that on purpose? No hurt intended, but I think you should have the stripes move around the body. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:03, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't seem to get them circly. Is it ok like this? Sorry, keep in mind, this nis only my first charart.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:35, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, wow! Is this your first attempt at a tabby? If so, it's pretty good! (You should see my first attempt at a tabby. LOL. xD) But the stripes don't exactly resemble the ones on Sandstorm's Warrior/Queen image. Try making them a bit more curved, and make them like tree branches so they split off in differant places. See This page if you really can't get the hang of it. ^_^ <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 18:39, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I know that she's facing the other way in her warrior pic, but I think she has too many stripes. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:47, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I will work on that when I get home, I'm at school right now. ^^ -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:21, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Redone, is this better? I did less stripes and tried to make them curve more. :) -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:44, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit thicker. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:12, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Ki) - For Approval
11:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice! But the shading isn't very noticeable, can you make it darker or add highlights? Also, add neck shading, and maybe make the white less bright, more pale gray. Vancou verpath  14:45, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 16:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

make the earpink a little bigger and darken the shading on his white parts a bit more. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make the earpink larger and darken his shading on the white parts more. Fire-★  22:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 13:23, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

His chest looks cream coloured. Go to a greyish white instead of a creamy white. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 16:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded His warrior version looks creamish too, but maybe lighten the cream if you can. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:34, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The grey should extend onto the legs a little, cover the eyes:  Dark hallows 00:12, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 21:46, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

It still isn't covering the eyes. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:40, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:38, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink a touch. This is good. :) ♪   B  a  t   ♫  01:45, March 5, 2010 (UTC)!

Should the white maybe go between the eyes, and then above them a bit, like on the picture? :3 This is very cute! ^^ Brightfrost  of SunClan...  07:37, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dang! its so hard to re upload correctly. Evanphoto 21:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did your changes show? Haikage Ash's Talk 02:54, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the earpink is brighter Evanphoto 13:16, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

The gray still needs to cover the eyes. Haikage Ash's Talk 14:52, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 10:34, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the transition a tiny bit. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:58, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 01:36, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his back, and this will be ready :) Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:10, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedEvanphoto 20:24, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! CBA? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:41, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Foxleap (Ki) - for approval
Yep, here he is ^^ After I completely messed up with Goldenflower, I'm pretty pleased with this. Comments? Brightfrost of SunClan...  17:54, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is brilliant, Frosty! All I can think of for you to improve is blur his haunch. Otherwise, this is amazing! :) x <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 19:07, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

You didn't mess up with Goldenflower, she was good. This is amazing Frosty. Make the Ear Pink a tad bigger and a bit lighter. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 19:33, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''Awh, thanks guys :] But still, I hated the Goldenflower image xD Anyway. I made the ear pink bigger and lightened it a bit, but maybe a bit too light pink? :3 And I attempted to blur the haunch a little. It's really annoying because his ear pink is really dark in his warrior image, I don't like it >:3 Hope this looks better. I think I'll stick to kits from now on, they're easier xD Brightfrost  of SunClan...  19:59, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Errrr... any comments? o.O Brightfrost  of SunClan...  07:23, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Did you get the eye colour of of his warrior/apprentice image? And did you use the burn tool to do his tabby markings? I can base my comments on that. XD! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:01, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes came straight from the warrior image, but I used the colour picker to get the tabby colour, as I wasn't sure if the user that did him as a warrior had gone over the markings more than once. :) Brightfrost  of SunClan...  17:50, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

If I am honest I think you should choose a darker ginger colour for the stripes. The current pnes look slightly brown. Try useing th burn tool. Just to see how they come out. XD <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:04, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I've tried using the burn tool on him, but the stripes come out quite ginger, instead of brown, as he is supposed to be a red-brown tabby I think? Sorry! But thanks for the comment. :] Brightfrost  of SunClan...  19:06, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think the color of the stripes is fine. maybe darken the earpink some, its a bit hard to see. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:52, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, darkened the ear pink, but I think that's made it harder to see? :3 Brightfrost  of SunClan...  19:01, March 7, 2010 (UTC) I got the first ear pink colour direct from the Foxleap image.

Yeah its harded to see, Sorry. The earpink color for kits is hard to find since there ears are so small. Experiment with different colors until you find the right one. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:44, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Download Foxleap's warrior picture and copy the earpink from there. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...01:46, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, re-done the ear pink (copied it of Foxleap's warrior image), however, it's VERY dark and very hard to see! ;3 Which is why I had it quite light in the first place. Brightfrost of SunClan...  17:19, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two to his visible foot--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:56, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Halftail (W)- For Approval


I'm pleased with this....Comments? ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  21:06, February 28, 2010 (UTC)Featherblaze

Sorry this is over the limit :(--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  21:07, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is good =) You need to add ear-pink and some of the stripes look a little cramped. ✐S  aN  dY

Okay, I'm on it. ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  21:12, February 28, 2010 (UTC)Featherblaze

Has the new one come up yet? ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  21:46, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't this over the limit?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  21:49, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

You didn't upload the picture properly. You need to upload it on warriors wiki not a picture sharing site--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  21:53, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  21:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I reuploaded a second one...it's not showing..... ♥Featherblaze♥  Meow to me!  22:14, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. Try doing it again. And here's a tutorial if you need help--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  22:20, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Please resubmit this after the image number has gone down; Nightshine is correct that this is over the 35 image limit. Will archive momentarily. -- Bramble 00:10, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

DON'T TAKE THIS DOWN! *gasps after running after breath* There is another picture that is declined and not for being over the limit so it's technicaly the 35th. --M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT

It's all good Min. Featherblaze, due to other images being declined, this section is fine now, but in future please be mindful of the image limit. As to the image; the whole thing is blurry, as if it's been stretched. That needs to be fixed before anything else can be done. -- Bramble 01:29, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  18:07, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit wobbly, try making them straighter. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:19, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get on it. ♥Featherblaze♥ Meow to me!  16:39, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Icy Invading the fire 20:24, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oakfur (A) For Approval
He was the only one who became a warrior. Then, his sister turned up out of nowhere in TFA XD I'm still wondering what happened to Marshkit... Anyway, comments? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 02:22, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, his sister showing up was really random. Image-wise, the highlight on the haunch is brighter than the others, so either lighten the others, or darken the highlight on the haunch. This is really good, though. -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 03:13, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Brightened highlights :) Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:41, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Blur the shading some more--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  03:45, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred it as much as I could Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:32, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on his face, and also make his ear pink stand out from his fur more if you can. insaneular   Talk  19:41, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I tried to blur the highlight, and I don't think it looks any better. As for the ear pink, should I lighten it, or darken it? I tried darkening it, and it didn't look too good Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:55, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Does he need an apprentice pic? If he does maybe darken the highlights a tad they're pretty close to white. for the earpink I would say lighten it. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:14, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

In a few books, he was listed as an apprentice in the allegiances. And I'll get to work on the highlights and ear pink Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:29, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:46, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make him more brownish? He looks a little maroon right now--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  01:49, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

And darken the ear pink. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 11:38, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, but I was told to lighten it by Ashshadow. I haven't done it yet, because I'm not on a computer that can. I tried to darken it, but it looked awful Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 15:15, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I darkened highlights, lightened ear pink, and blurred the shading on his back Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:12, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, wait guys? Ashshadow is right, he was never listed as an apprentice I don't think. Just let me change the eye color, and I'll make this Oakfur's apprentice image. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:56, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Again, sorry guys! Eye color and file name have been changed Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:44, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome, and very ready. :) Comments before approval? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !  01:10, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Cedarheart (A)- For approval
So here's the apprentice version of Cedarheart. Don't go saying there's not enough room...there is one discussion.-- ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...07:38, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED for some reason where the eyes weren't done and the ears. I'll need to work on the ears....-- ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...07:53, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED to fix the ugly ears.-- ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...08:25, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred alot and the earpink is too light for a gray cat. Haikage Ash's Talk 11:30, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED-- ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...22:55, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and tail more. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:49, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Is this good?-- ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...18:32, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Forgot to shade haunch.-- ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...18:36, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur a little more? Dark hallows 15:50, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone work on this for me? I'm going to be busy starting tommorrow. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...20:21, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

It depends: how long do you think it'll be before you can work on this again? If it's less than seven days it can stay (I think), but if it's longer than seven days then this should be withdrawn, or someone can agree to finish this for you, like was done with Blackclaw's elder image or Sorreltail's queen image. How long do you think it'll be before you can work on this again, Quail? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   23:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind. I found some freetime, so, REUPLOADED. I blurred as much as I could! Please don't push me so hard now. I'm probably not going to be on that much this week. I need to get this approved by St. Patrick's Day. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...00:07, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED FORGOT TO BLUR BACK.-- ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...00:11, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch and tail still needs more blurring. I can help you with that if you'd like. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:03, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'm probably not going to be on for at least a week, so Ash, you may help me with the haunch and tail. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...16:10, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I hope you dont mind but while I was blurring the shading I fixed some of the blurred line art for you. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:38, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (Ki) - For Approval
Decline this if it over the limit, but there are two discussions (I think) - the one about the blanks and the confusion of the mousefur apprentice image. Anyway, is it alright? ☼ Misty ☼ Here comes the summer...  16:21, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is the 36th image. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 19:15, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, I think this is the 35th. Make the nose pink a bit lighter, and the eyes look more yellow than amber. Make them more amberish. This is really good though! Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:43, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:17, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Right, sorry! XD! She needs to lokk a bit more 'marbled'. Like her med cat image. Mothwing (Ki) looks a bit..um...tabbyish. I know that she is a tabby but make her look like her med cat image. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:06, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Marbled like how? :3 ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  12:19, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I would upload Mothwing's med cat image but it woon't let me. Make the stripes blockya dn thick. Not like striped. More liek Mothwing and Silverstream (easy to see on her). Tell me if you don't understand. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:25, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand, but Fawnstorm says it doesn't matter... so I'm gonna reupload her when I get home cos I can't right now -glares at ancient, prehistoric, dodgy school compuers- ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  12:37, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Does anyone else agree that she should be more marbled? I think it should. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:42, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Edited eyes, nose and shading. Sorry about the "marble" thing, guys! Fawny said it didn't matter, then changed her mind (see the strikethrough comment) and says I should marble it. So should I? Fawny, I'm sorry but I really don't understand what you mean by "marbling" it, but thanks for the advice! Please explain and can everyone else say their opinions? Thanx ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  17:07, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes more 'blocked'. Kinda chunky. Like Mothwing's med cat image:

See how the stripes are joined and together? Just have a go at marbling them. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black">Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:06, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the marbling confusion. It's just you said at school that it didn't matter. I don't really see what I can do to edit Moth - her stripes are already chunky and joined together. ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  18:41, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

What else do I need to do? ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  20:07, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I stiil think you need to marble them. Make her look lesss dark because in her Med cat image. Especiaally her legs and tail. Yoou don't have to though. And I sorted out my siggie. :( <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Yellow background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow ">Fawny 12:53, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Why the sad face? What do you mean by "Make her look lesss dark because in her Med cat image"? And I can't "marble" her if I don't know what it means. Sorry. I just don't see what's wrong with her stripes. And I still don't understand the "marbling" thing. Pleeeese someone as well as Fawny comment! ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  17:41, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I meant she dosen't have dark legs and tail in her med cat image but she does in her kit image. But because you don't want me to comment anymore, I won't. (That is what you want isn't it? Its really hard to understand how people say thins online!) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue ">Fawnstorm 18:40, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not very good at explaining things, but I'll try and help explain this. The tail looks fine, but the rest of the stripes sort of look like Y-shaped tabbies, while on her medicine cat image and medicine cat apprentice image the stripes are marble type stripes. Some examples of of marble tabby kits are Lionheart's kit image, Tigerheart's kit image, and Brambleclaw's kit image. The problem with the stripes is that they're the wrong type of stripes. However, the dark legs and tail are fine, since that's the type of shading that's being used. The image overall looks great, just make the stripes a bit wider and more triangular so that they're less like Y's and more like on the examples I gave you, and this should be good. Does this help any at all? -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 23:50, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Icy and Fawny! Sorry X a trillon for wasting peoples time by being dense. I'm soooooo sorry I didn't understand! I'll reupload her ASAP ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  12:56, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for explaining that Icy! Sorry for not explaining it as well as well as Icy did Misty. *Face pillow*. I got Frosty's text and I thought I had mistunderstood you. Thats what I meant when i said Marble. Thanks so much for explaining it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue ">Fawnstorm 13:32, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Phew. I marbled Moth! Are the stripes alright? I completely redid her. Comments? ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  16:54, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm no good at critiquing Marbled cats (When it comes to their stripes) so you'll have to wait for Fawnstorm and Icethroat to give you their opinion. But I think the stripes need to be slightly more blurred. =D <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 16:58, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I agree with you. Blur the stripes a bit and dodge the base of her tail, its a little dark. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color; Blue background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue ">Fawnstorm 17:04, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, blur them a tad bit more, and then this should be good. This looks much better. -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 21:03, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred stripes and lightened tail base. Thank you sooo much guys for your comments and your help! ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  07:57, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think the Lineart on her right back-paw is blurred. I am not sure though. Tell me if I'm wrong. ;D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Green; background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Green;">Fawny 09:44, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) Up for Approval
Has anybody reserved Tigerstar as an apprentice? Can I call him? If so, I call him!

Crystalpaw *glimmer* 00:00, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Look on the main page where the current projects table is. Use Ctrl F and type in the name of a character to see if it's reserved or not and then you can add him to your list. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:03, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

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Okay. This may be over 35 (andI'm sorry if it is) and just forget the Ravenpaw kit thing, and be HAPPY! However I would like to put this up for approval now.



I'm not sure whether or not he had the scars as an apprentice, but I think I did a pretty good job on him. Comments? Crystalpaw *glimmer* 00:25, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  00:31, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

>_<*sighs* Must you always put me down, Night? I'll wait, as long as it doesn't get declined. I really worked hard on this!

Crystalpaw *glimmer* 01:03, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Calm down, Crystal. All Night pointed out was that this is over the limit, but only by a few images. Some are close to approval. If this is declined it won't be for long. You can put it up as soon as there is only 34 pictures on the page (or less). As for the image, the shading will need some more blurring, and I don;t think he had his scars as an apprentice...he might have since Thistleclaw was training him, but I never read Bluestar's Prophecy so I wouldn't know. Vancou verpath  01:28, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I second that, Mosspath. Crystal (if you don't care if I call you that) you'r art work is gorgous! But still, it is over the limit. Nightshine mean't nothing against you, and nore do I. But all I'm saying is don't pick fight's with people online, it can get pretty nasty... (I know first hand) ♣Silver  thistle  03:17, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

There's room now, but in future all you need do is check and see if there are 35 sections with 'For Approval' after them to see if you can put one up. The image is very good, but he needs ear pink, and his pupil needs to be in the middle of his eyes. The tabby stripes need to go further onto his pelt, and the shading needs to be blurred. Bramble 23:58, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

He needs more stripes on his haunch, his head and his arms--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  00:05, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! All the changes should be done by Saturday or sooner, right now I'm in a rush so I don't have time! And sorry, Night. Just a little frustrated.

Crystalpaw *glimmer* 00:21, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think this is okay. I just don't know how to put it in the right place, that's why it's over there... Crystalpaw *glimmer* 22:56, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. As for the image make the earpink smaller and blur it more. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:47, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks, and the changes are done, but I don't know if they'll show up. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 16:33, March 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * Would he have had scars as an apprentice? ✐S  aN  dY  18:53, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I doubt it, but on the other hand Thistleclaw was quite a brutal mentor. What do you guys think? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:40, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think he should have scars. Evanphoto 11:14, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I have mixed feelings of whether he should have the scars on his apprentice image or not. Does the apprentice image represent him as an apprentice near the beginning or end of his apprenticeship? If near the end, then scars would be fine, but near the beginning I doubt it...so yeah, I'm not sure. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   23:40, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

His eye needs to be fixed. I think maybe he can have one scar and that's it, because he probably got most of his scars as a warrior--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  23:47, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to say get rid of the scars. I don't think he had any scars when he was an apprentice. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...08:17, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

The changes will be made every Saturday, because I have homework, but I'll get it done! Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:40, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Brindleface(Ki)-For Approval
Alot of thanks to insane!!-- ≈Ivy -sama≈  08:20, March 4, 2010 (UTC

Ahhh!!what happend?-- ≈Ivy -sama≈  08:24, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

That's easy to sort out just get a new kit line art and put it over it :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:17, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

FIXED-- ≈Ivy -sama≈  11:52, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

There are 4 or 5 white pixels on the legs. :) <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 12:12, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

also you have a white pixel on the right I'll let you find that :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 12:24, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be a bit bigger and maybe a little lighter, and her muzzle has white on it. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:07, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Theiur are some strips with no bluring at all, so I say blur all the stripes once more,  Trout leap  21:47, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded

The stripes look black. lighten them a bit. Haikage Ash's Talk 14:50, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded ≈Ivy -sama≈  13:49, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes still look a little dark. Her other images have more of a darkish gray than the classicly black silver tabby markings. But this is amazing! Vancou verpath  00:09, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ≈Ivy -sama≈

The stripes look too close together, try making them more seperated. Also, Her other images have dapples on them, think you could add some? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:09, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈

Add a stripe to her foot and blur the specks of gray on her tail and arms some more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:59, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge(KP) for approval.
Well... here you go. I know that Spottedsky reserved this earlier, but there was no CharArt (that I know of) for smudge yet, and it was reserved awhile ago, so, I hope this works out. So... comments?Jmiles 06:46, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Darken the shading, and change the file name. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 11:19, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh wait. You already have one image up for approval. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 12:04, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but the spots need to be bigger, and Maple's right, you have one up for approval already. I don't know much yet, but I think the senior warriors will decline it, or

something. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:14, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I thought someone already reserved this? O.o -  B-Day -Kitty!   :D  21:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Jmiles, this will have to be declined until your first image is approved. I think one of the seniors warriors will have to decline this. When your first image is approved, then you can put this up. Rain whisker  22:23, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, it said he was black and white, not black with white spots... <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  00:49, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It never said that he was black with white. It showed that in Cats of the Clans, but that book can't really be trusted as a lot of the characters in that book were done completely wrong. He's white with black patches, and it says that he has amber eyes, not blue. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:48, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

OK. White with black patches, amber eyes, darken the shading. Consider it done. As for having one image already up for approval, if you haven't noticed already, IT CANNOT BE APPROVED!!!! It was already reserved by Insane. Go up and see it if you want. Somebody please help explain all this reservation stuff and approval stuff on my Talk Page, because I'm really, really confused! Jmiles 19:06, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's fine. I'll decline the Mudclaw now. ✐S aN  dY  19:07, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! After it's declined, can I try Smudge again? And I wouls still like some explanation on my talk page, if it isn't too much trouble. Jmiles 19:15, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

You can continue working on him now, and I'll come and write what will undoubtedly turn into a rather long explanation (through no fault of my own) on your talk page. ✐S aN  dY  20:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry. I sorta died on the blur tool. I had a bad day. (my internet crashed twice and I have the flu)Jmiles 05:40, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, I'm sorry to hear that! Well, he looks better. But I would define the patches more, they look to blurred now. And also, add ear pink to the left ear Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look more orange than amber. Haikage Ash's Talk 15:41, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

OK, less orange eyes, more patch definition, and ear pink in the left ear. Got it. Jmiles 16:21, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changed the eye color, redefined the black patches. I was a little confused about where exactly to put the ear pink because of the angle that he was at. If it's the exact same image, tell me. My computer did not want to put this one on, and it kept uploading the old one. Jmiles 16:46, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I understand. My computer doesnt want me to upload the image period. As for your image, blur the patches a tiny bit more and his eyes still seem orange. Amber is a bit more golden. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:51, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay. I'll do that. Jmiles 16:59, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Still not quite amber... I think. I pushed the rate on the blur tool to 80%, and blurred the patches more. Once again, tell me if there's anything wrong with the image (I mean upload wise) <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 21:00, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

The eyecolor is fine now. Sorry when I took it out of thumbnail size it showed up under your first message. Imagewise, try to make the white a little less gray and darken the shading. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:48, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. OK, I got the shading darkened and redefined the white in his fur. <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 02:08, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Instead of having his fur w/ black spots, make it more like less circular patches and clusters, and the eyes are a little too brown. Try using a reddish orange instead of a brownish one. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:43, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

When you say to make "more less circular patches and clusters", do you mean like a tortoiseshell, just with only 2 colors? I think I know what you mean, maybe. I can do the eye color thing though. <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 01:49, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think that's what she's talking about, so it's sort of like the style used here. Also, there's blurred lineart in various places. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   21:04, March 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Whoops, forgot to say that I think the patches are fine as they are now, though. :) -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   21:10, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay, I'll fix the lineart. But do I change the patches or not, because I really don't want to. <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 05:23, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think that the patches are fine. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !  01:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall(K) - For Approval
First kit and first tabby! Woohoo! Comments and/or critique?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  16:28, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his paws.  Trout leap  17:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Great job but I can't see any black in/on his eyes.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:19, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading, and the eye has a pupil, Artimas.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  03:05, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes like on his warrior image--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     06:45, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  03:33, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Try to darken his fur a little. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:12, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the fur color is ok, but make the earpink a bit bigger. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:20, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:43, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  18:32, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (A)-- For Approval
Here is Owlwhisker as an apprentice! This is actually the 34th post if I am correct (cause I forgot what I counted XP).Comments? Concerns? Snowflight 1  Happy V-Day!!  19:27, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good, just darken his stripes a little and blur the shading on his back. insaneular   Talk  21:28, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened stripes and blurred back shading. What else? Snowflight 1  Happy V-Day!!  00:37, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten or brighten the ear pink because I can barely see it right now. Otherwise, this looks really good. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   17:59, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened earpink. It may take a while to show up (hasn't shown up for me yet XP). Is it too light? Icy- Thanks! -- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  01:35, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try making it a tad darker and make his tail stripes darker--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     06:44, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened ear pink and tail stripes. might be a while to show up.-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:08, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and blur it--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:02, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened and blurred shading. What else? Snowflight 1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Onestar (D) - For Approval
Okay... the most failish image ever... It doesn't look like either the leader or warrior image... but I tried to incorportate the two. I'd say constructments, but I think critisism? is more appropriate, so fire away! ✐S aN  dY  21:39, March 6, 2010 (UTC) He looks awesome, Sandy :D It might just be my eyes, but on his leader image his muzzle looks slightly cream colored rather than white... maybe change it on this image? Seriously though, if I had attempted this it would have been way worse. insaneular   Talk  21:42, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'm boring and sad so I fixed it right away. Don't know if the changes are showing properly though. ✐S aN  dY  21:52, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good Sandy! But maybe add more earpink. -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:53, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

More as in... lighter? darker? brighter? bigger? sorry Sandy is dumb... ✐S aN  dY  11:22, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think they mean bigger, but I'd disagree. Maybe lighten it, as I can't really see it right not. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 15:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'Reuploaded ✐S  aN  dY  15:49, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I just love this image, good job! It might be just me, but the stripes on the leader image are more dark and dusky looking than on this image, but other than that, it's great! Vancou verpath  00:01, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is quite good, Sandy! BUT, the white muzzle and the rest of his pelt need to blend together a little more. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:46, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did my best. Duskier isn't really possible unless you want me to redo the whole image as I used the burn tool so it darkened the pelt colour to make the stripes (if that makes sense). The muzzle won't blend any more. ✐S aN  dY  21:44, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

i think he looks good. I cant really tell on his other images but should there be a stripe at the base of his tail? Haikage Ash's Talk 01:11, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐S  aN  dY  18:38, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's ready. CBA? Haikage Ash's Talk 19:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Fur length
It says in Cats of the Clans (I know they have a lot of mistakes), and I think Firestar's Quest, too, that Echosong has long fur. Her charart is shorthaired. ? <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  21:41, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think we should change her but both her chararts have already been made--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:54, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

If we change her it will be during a tweak week. She could be changed with minor edits. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:57, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. It just bugs me a bit. <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  01:28, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Also firestars long furred-Raffyjack123

Firestar is short haired. It was discussed somewhere and it was decided that he had short hair. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:37, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

And in all of his images on book covers, and such, he's fluffy, but not longhaired Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:44, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

All these issues need to be addressed in a future Tweak Week. If you have citations for these fur lengths then it may be an idea to help Project Characters out and add them to the pages. ✐S aN  dY  18:34, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Snowbird (A) - For Approval
Ok what do you think? :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 20:00, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Shruggy. (: Darken the shading, and ear pink. Icy Invading the fire 20:18, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

You either erased the eye bit or used the tom blank. Other than that and what Icestorm said this is wonderful. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:49, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But you've made the shading a bit too dark, run the dodge tool over the whole image a couple of times Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:31, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hold on Icestorm said to darken the shading and you said to lighten it? And for the ear pink I used the one from the her warrior charart. And yes I used the tom one xD I'll sort out the eye with the shading when I know if I should lighten it or darken it :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:08, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it, darkening it would make her look even more gray than white Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 17:52, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfall, it needs to be lighter. Also, even though the color you used is from another of a cat's images, the color may not work for your particular image because of shading or other reasons, so I think that the ear pink should be darkened just a tad bit, too. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   21:15, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a little too gray. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:15, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Just run the dodge tool over the whole thing once or twice--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:03, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

One-eye (A) - For Approval
Yeah, don't take this down because Cloudkit is withdrawn. But any other reasons, yes you can. I'm really proud of her. Comments? All hail the blurry GIMP! :) Icy Invading the fire 21:49, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

I love the shading, Icy! I only have a few things: blur the shading on the tail-tip where it goes from highlight to shading a bit, make the ear pink bigger, and blur the highlight on the muzzle (I think it's a highlight) more or darken it because it looks a bit like a while muzzle. And her eye needs a pupil, since it's not the white one. insaneular   Talk  21:51, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

KK. Yes it is a highlight. And, she has a pupil, I blurred it to make her look blind. Should I un-blur it? Icy Invading the fire 21:54, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

I would say so personally, because on her elder image it is normal, and only one of her eyes (the white one) was blind. insaneular   Talk  22:01, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icy Invading the fire 22:04, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlight on her tail some more. Good job on this one! Vancou verpath  23:28, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the whole thing a bit lighter?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:33, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, Icy, I was literally just about to approve Cloudkit... can I go ahead? Or was there a reason you wanted to withdraw him? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:45, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okay Night. You can approve Cloudkit. And yeah Nightshine I will, and thanks Moss. (: Icy Invading the fire 01:02, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Icy''' Invading the fire 01:39, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

I would darken her muzzle, it looks too white now. But this is fantastic! Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:18, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Correct. It looks like a white muzzle right now. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 11:51, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Darken muzzle, Icy''' Invading the fire 22:58, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on the tail could be darkened, too. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 20:22, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the front legs is a bit dark compared to the rest of the shading. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:30, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lighten paw shading, darken highlight. Icy Invading the fire 23:17, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her haunch Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:58, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, plus, it won't blur anymore. Icy Invading the fire 00:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and make it a bit longer. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:02, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icy Invading the fire 01:16, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the muzzle a bit more. And then there's this place right where the leg connects with the haunch that needs blurring Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:50, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icy Invading the fire 00:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:16, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. Dark hallows 05:37, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Updated. Icy Invading the fire 15:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Blanks - For Approval


I've made these a while ago and now I finally get to put them up. Yay!--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:59, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

The back paw looks strange and the fur on the back can go.  B-Day -Kitty!   :D  00:04, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just my computer (Sorry if it is) but when I try to use the PaintBucket to fill in the main body (This applies to all the blanks) on Pixlr, the eye that is fully visible fills in as well. D= <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 00:08, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The paws are oddly shaped: They have an extra toe, or so it looks like. There are also visible gaps in the lineart in the eyes. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:11, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I made the backs unfluffy. I think it might be your computer doing that Shistar. On the front paws of cats they have a weird thumb-like toe thing. They have that on the Loner blanks as well. I hope that's what you were talking about.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:14, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Shigura: It does that on a lot of the blanks, I think it happened when Pixlr was updated or something like that. Nightshine: the back hind paw looks a bit flat, try bringing the front of it forward a little bit in a curve like the other hind paw. About the front paws, (on the loner blanks) I don't think there's an extra toe...I think that's a tuft of fur on the longhair blanks, so in my opinion I think that you should get rid of the extra toe. However, aside from those things, these look really good! I just have to say that I love the fur on the longhairs. :) -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   00:54, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed back paw and got rid of extra toe.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:16, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose shorter on the right than on the left. -- Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 01:26, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The back paw looks a bit too big, perhaps make it smaller? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:34, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made back paw smaller and fixed nose--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:59, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shoulder a bit more...subtle, I guess you could say. Right now it's just this sort of drop from the neck to the back.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  06:38, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The front paws look a bit like camel feet. Maybe make the foot round and then put the line in instead on individual toes. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:06, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

These are good. I could nevery make good blanks. The face looks a little square if you know what I mean. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 23:09, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed front paws and shoulder--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:16, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Would it be okay for me to comment? I think that the faces should be a little rounder. <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  02:20, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

The longhairs need more facial fur, and some fluff along the back. Dark hallows 17:02, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ignore my horrible redline (and blue... green). I'm using a touchpad xD.  Dark hallows 17:18, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Those are great. Night! However, the (what would be) belly (under the chest, past the leg in front, nearest to the haunch) looks a little tubby. make it curve inward, JUST A LITTLE! =) Crystals and Pearls *glimmer*  20:23, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made backs a bit more fluffy, lengthened back paw, added haunch, made front paws rounder, added fluffy cheeks and I attempted to fix the head but it looks strange to me.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:15, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

You're right. I think it's the placement of the eye that makes the head look strange. also make the nose a little bigger. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:19, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made nose bigger--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:52, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

The chest is jutting out a bit on the shorthairs. (Lol, I'm all for subtle anatomy.)--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:01, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made chest smoother--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:30, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

It has a bit of a flattened face, doesn't it? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 18:30, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the front back leg a little flatter in the paw area so that it doesn't look too round, but not pencil flat. Snowflight 1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  18:37, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

There are still gaps in the eye lineart. Fix those. <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  21:39, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made foot a bit more flat. Raven: What do you mean? --  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     22:58, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

If you use the paint bucket, the fully visible eye fills in, too. <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  00:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Which program do you use? I use MS paint and that never happens--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:58, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

That only happens in pixlr. I think the eye should be ok because the same thing happens with leader and kittypet blanks. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:00, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

(To Ash- the loner blanks do it, too) I think they look good. <font face="Papyrus">Raven <font face="Papyrus">Randomness!  04:33, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (A)--For Approval
I love Poppyfrost. And Tortoiseshells. And the reason I put this up was because withdrew Leafdapple. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:20, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Do you use GIMP? Anyways, for the image, blur the spots and shading a tad more. Icy Invading the fire 23:24, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred patches and shading. I don't think the changes are showing up... Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:46, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the shading on the tail--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:16, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened and blurred shading. I also brightened the highlights. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 11:49, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be a little bigger and lighter. Otherwise i love it! Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:29, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Made earpink bigger. I don't think I should lighten it, but if you think I should, please let me know. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:22, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ginger on her head and add shading to her right arm--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Anyway, no, Ice, I don't use GIMP. I use pixlr. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 01:15, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the black parts more circular?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:19, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I've attempted. Does it look good? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 01:49, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened shading. I'm assuming you didn't mean on the back or chest. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 02:05, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I just meant on the back. But that's fine. Blur the shading now--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred Shading. Anyway, I realized I've reserved only tortoishells.... Maplefern Carrying the torch... 02:12, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Tail shading needs to be blurred--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred it as much as I could. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 14:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Would it be possible for me...
to edit the fail messy rogue blanks? During next tweak week. I mean... not like redoing all the images, but just having a neater blank for future rogues? I hate them so much xD. Dark hallows 17:23, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, I like the rogue blanks! Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 18:36, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I like the blanks too, and if you redid them unless it's a minor change I think we will have to re-do all the rogues. For consistency I mean. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:16, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I really like the rogue blanks that we have, I remember thinking when I joined the project how awesome they are. :) Plus what Ash said. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   20:47, March 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * That would depend Shady... on what exactly is wrong with them. Perhaps you could clarify? I think though (without speaking to Bramble) that they'll probably have to wait until all the images are done... ✐S  aN  dY  21:37, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

And the heads on the prey-hunter blanks are weird. The nose isn't on the end of the head, and the head itself is kind of triangular... <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  21:58, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

To me, they look a little like they are rocking backwards, if the front legs went out a little more they'd look better. I have no problem leaving them like this, though, if it's too much trouble.  Dark hallows 22:20, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's not too much trouble Shady. I think I'm going to leave this one for Bramble when she has time to get online. ✐S aN  dY  18:40, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather (WA) - For approval
Hrm, didn't come out as good as I hoped since it was a tabby style I'm not used to. Ah well, constructments? insaneular   Talk  21:52, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken all the stripes, I can't really see them. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 21:55, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded too much, or just dark enough? insaneular   Talk  22:05, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Just dark enough. Very good Insane! :D Leprecat   The End of the Rainbow is the Place tooby!  23:01, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Insane! I love the stripes. :) Just blur the highlights a tad, and add one on the tail. Icy Invading the fire 23:30, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

And, can you blur the pupil a tad to make him look blind? Icy Invading the fire 23:31, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, that shouldn't be necessary, Icy. If your blind, your pupils stay the same. See Jayfeather's mca and mc images, and Rock's image Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:38, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added tail highlight and blurred them a bit  insaneular    Talk  00:17, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit bigger. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:14, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? insaneular   Talk  02:29, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

I can really see the ear pink. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 12:29, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I assume you meant that you can't see the ear pink? XD I brightened it a bit. insaneular   Talk  15:28, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great :) CBA? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:56, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:07, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ...Better? insaneular   Talk  15:06, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) - For Approval
Not much to say on this, I used the same style as I used on Dawnflower's apprentice image. Comments and suggestions? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:04, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

He's longhaired but besides that this is amazing. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

*face-palm* Oh wow, I really should have noticed that, especially since I had his image beside the image I was shading the entire time...I'm not sure if I can fix it or if I'll have to get someone else to fix it for me, but let me see what I can do. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:14, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

If you cant I can replace the blank for you. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:19, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I got it okay. I had to erase the tail and then recolor and shade in the longhair tail, and color in the extra fur on the belly, but aside from that it was really easy to fix. Did I miss anything? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:35, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Good job. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:39, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing Icy! Just blur the haunch shading a tad. It looks a little dark. Icy Invading the fire 02:40, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments Ash and Ice. :) Does this look better? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:49, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, Icy. (: Amazing image! I don't think i could do better, or anyone else. Icy Invading the fire 02:51, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Icy's right, this looks perfect! CBA? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (D) - For Approval
Hopefully this is better than Gorsepaw as a kit... <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;"> Shistar Mai Talk Page 21:02, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

I know you were trying to make him like the leader image, but his upper body looks really empty without a tabby stripe there. Upper-left chest area, I mean.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:46, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... so what should I do? Do you think it'd be alright to slip in another stripe? <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;"> Shistar Mai Talk Page 00:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes extend longer toward the chest and add another stripe on the neck and tail. Also darken the shading and ear pink--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Guys, I think Ashshadow had this reserved first Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:37, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops... another epic fail on my part. Sorry Ashshadow! D= <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;"> Shistar Mai Talk Page 14:06, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mistystar in a Hat


It seems spoilers are unavoidable in this case, but I'm sure everyone knows by now that Mistyfoot suceeds Leopardstar as this has been confirmed for a while. We have had countless users asking to make her leader charart, some even attempting to reserve her and we are aware of what a popular character she has become. We've talked it over for many an evening an eventually decided that the fairest way to decide who gets to make her leader charart is to use the random factor. There will be an opportunity to sign up under this message and the 'winning name' (so to call it) will be generated using a random online generator. Insane has kindly agreed to oversee this and will video the selection so it can be ensured fair for everyone.

This event is mainly to avoid a mad rush of users fighting to add her to their current projects on the 23rd, and as my original idea of just reserving her before any of you wake up was rejected... ( ^_^ ) well, this is the best option and should hopefully prevent any arguments.

Note: This is a one time occurence due to the mass interest in her character and will unlikely be repeated in the future for any other character.

Well, anyway. If you have any questions feel free to ask me either here or on my talk page; I am writing this in Bramble's absence so posting on her talk page is not the quickest option right now.

Please post any comments and question above the line and sign with your signature only below the line if you wish to be entered. Thanks ✐S  aN  dY  21:04, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Haha, good luck everyone who enters. =D <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 21:07, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

^ I'm really proud of that charart, pleaasseeeeeeeeeeee can I do it? insaneular   Talk  21:58, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

When will the draw end? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:36, March 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * Oops, sorry guys, I forgot to put that in. The sign-up will end on the 20th, giving a week to do so, which also gives Insane time to do the draw. ✐S  aN  dY  09:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Entries here:

Icy Invading the fire 21:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Echoheart 21:37, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

 N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     21:46, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

 B-Day -Kitty!   :D  22:09, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Iceyfang 22:27, March 13, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:44, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

-- Vancou verpath  14:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Quince(Q)- For Approval
I used the same colors being used for her kittypet image. I also wanted to giv putting a collar on a queen blank a go and Moonflight changed her image to kittypet. Comments? Haikage Ash's Talk 23:55, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading seems a little too dark on her face and tail. Make the ear pink a bit smaller--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:57, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. very good, Ash! -- Icy Invading the fire 00:26, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is wonderful! Make the tag on the collar a bit smaller. Man, I'm doing Princess's queen image, and the collar is awful! Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:32, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome as always. Just lighten her front leg that's not facing us. It's a good thing it turned out better than my queen. Mine was awful!!! -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 00:37, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments everyone. I can't make the tag smaller without re-doing the whole image. Should I redo her or is the tag not that bad? Nightfall: I drew the collar in paint if that helps. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:47, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Littlecloud (A)-For Approval
Nothing special. Comments?-- Vancou verpath  14:14, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a bit...golden compared to his MC and MCA image. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 14:21, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from the MCA image. Should I darken it a bit? Vancou verpath  14:23, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the image. I also defined the stripes more. Is this okay? OMpath 3rd Place! 14:44, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (E) - For Approval
I don't like this one. At all >.< Constructments? -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  15:14, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

She looks great, Hawktalon, just darken the earpink a bit because it looks fluorescent. insaneular   Talk  15:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)