Talk:Speckletail



Style Concerns

 * Names list needs items followed by colons
 * Family list needs entries followed by colons
 * Missing history sections need filling in
 * Spoiler in intro-blurb (word 'formerly' was used)
 * Description in intro is WEIRD. Tabby isn't a color, and cat can't be regular tabby and spotted tabby at once...
 * Intro feels like it have a TC POV to it. Should be general and undisputed facts. We can't verify how the other cats viewed that cat.

Snowkit as her Apprentice
I removed the Char Template inclusion of Snowkit as her apprentice. Apprenticeship only counts if it's formalized by a leader, which this never was. She was simply trying to teach a kit disabled beyond usefulness to his clan. Bluestar never named him her apprentice, and thus he was NEVER apprentice so his training under her (pathetic as it was) does not count as her mentoring. At least in my opinion. Feel free to discuss. Kitsufox ( Fox's Den ) 02:16, 21 October 2007 (UTC)