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Flower Foot (Hunter) - For Approval
Yikes I'm not sure this looks very good..  HA WK FI RE98  22:27, September 10, 2018 (UTC)

The stripes go all the way across on the main body, and don't taper off how you have it. You also need to reupload over File:Flower Foot.hunter.png. (this version had the right idea for the stripes, speaking of.) ​​​​​

I cant see the marking on the face. Like the 2 upside down "V"s, can you fix that? And ''how dose this look so good! Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 04:39, September 11, 2018 (UTC)''

Reuploaded. Messed around with the stripes a bit. Thank you, Owlbite! I tried darkening that forehead "V" but I'm not sure how much I can really define it on these blanks! There's a very limited amount of forehead space.  HA WK FI RE98  14:05, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smudge the stripes to match the others? They seem to be more smudged, the other images might have texture as well but I can't tell. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 19:20, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

There isn't texture on this set, surprisingly. ​​​

I mostly used the smudge tool to create these stripes, Mink! Could you elaborate to give me a clearer idea of how to make them look better? :-)  HA WK FI RE98  20:00, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

The other images are smudged to go along with what would be texture if she had it (she doesn't) the stripes just make it look that way. If you see how the warrior is smudged, it needs to look a little more like that. These stripes seem to blurry at the moment. If that makes sense. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:11, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sharpened up the stripes a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  20:36, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Connect the facial stripes to the eyes, I think the dorsal stripe is leaking right along the middle of the back, and the shading is leaking along the tip of the tail. 18:49, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed facial stripes and erased leakage.  HA WK FI RE98  01:27, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 20:10, September 15, 2018 (UTC)

My apologies for breaking the CBA, but the stripes should be a bit sharper. I didn't blur mine at all, and these look blurred. ​

Reuploaded. I hope this looks better. I guess I tried to make them look like my own style a little too much!  HA WK FI RE98  15:17, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Drizzle (Hunter) - CBA
22:10 Tue Sep 11

In the other images, it has more gray, but hear, it looks like there is more white, can you add some more gray? Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:37, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Owlbite. It appears like in the warrior image (the one you're trying most to imitate), the gray reaches more into the flank area.  HA WK FI RE98  23:38, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

The warrior isn't the one you need to match, you have to match the first in the set and from the looks of it. It'd be the this one. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 00:01, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

the kit is actually first, but since that's frontwards it doesn't help much. I agree that the grey extends further than it does here. 00:25, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:58 Wed Sep 12

I think the patches should be smudged more, to match the early settler Malina457 (talk) 01:31, September 12, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Ummm, sort of what was stated before, ut the shading looks like a shadow, can you make it blend in, or smooth it out to make it look llike,"shading"  and sorry if this at all seems rude Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 04:43, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

... We've had images tweaked/redone for over blurred shading. Imo it's fine, but can I get another opinion? This was shaded exactly like my other images that I used blurred shading. 11:43 Wed Sep 12

Shading looks good to me Sun Malina457 (talk) 12:17, September 12, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded Also realized I had the eye color as an old one. 13:11 Wed Sep 12

Define the texture on the face just a bit? 18:55, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?

Reuploaded yup.

CBA?

Thorn (Hunter) - For Evaluation
Hope I did this right! 17:57, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

The blank is too small. Make sure you're downloading it properly. Try downloading it from here. If that's not the problem, then make sure you aren't changing the resolution when making the charart in your art program. Thorn's image also requires texture. Hope this helps. ^^ 18:58, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? There's tutorials here on shading if you're confused. 21:22, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

it should also be the short-furred blank as well. 21:28, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

^ so use this blank instead my bad 21:48, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Also, could you add/define the earpink? 00:21, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely redone with texture and defined shading & ear-pink -- 16:57, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

This is great! Smooth out the shading overall and definitely add some on the body and tail. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:05, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Lovely! Add some shading to the tail and add some definition to the eye color.  HA WK FI RE98  17:06, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Add the notches ears and define/make more visible the texture. 18:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and the earpink. 20:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Can you darken the texture by a few shades? I can barely see it. It seems much light than the others in the set. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 19:55, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded added another layer of darker texture, defined eye shading, added tail shading and ear notches. Thanks for all the support! Unfortunately, the program I use doesn't really have very good options for smoothing shading and it's very difficult to do so without colour distortion so please could I have a second opinion on the smoothness of the shading? Thanks! Also, what do you mean by define the ear-pink - should I remove the blur? -- 13:19, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

By define the ear pink, I mean make it more visible on the cat so it doesn't blend in with the fur. May I ask what program you're using? And, do you have the shading on a different layer from the base color? Either way, could you define the tail shading some more and add some shading depth, too? 14:06, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded defined ear-pink and tail shading and darkened shading in some areas. I use Krita (without any custom brushes) and yes, I have the shading on a different layer. -- 17:25, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Alder(Hunter) ~For Approval
I hate the earpink, but I wanted to get this up Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:40, September 15, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall. I know you said you disliked the earpink, but it's only supposed to be on one ear, the one closest to us. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:28, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

No, you can use both ears for this blank. The ear pink is a good enough color and doesn't look too far off from what I have.

This is really great, I love the pattern. Define the shading a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  02:28, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, sorry Hawky, I didnt see you! you commented while I was makeing it :POwlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 02:37, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Sharpen up the pattern; the kit is first and the pattern is much sharper and the fleck-like specks of brown are smaller. ​​​​​

I agree with Hawk, you can't even really tell what's shading. But can you expand the ear pink, the tip of the ear doesn't have any Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 03:11, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

These blanks don't require the entire ear filled in; most of them don't and it's optional. ​​​​​

Re-up, not even 24 hours, and Ive already done a re-do, gg life, gg Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 06:03, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Owlbite, defining the shading does not mean darkening all of the shading in its entirety. It means maybe picking locations that are the furthest from your light source and making the shading on those areas more apparent. I usually just use the burn tool and darken the edges of those areas and that works pretty effectively. ^^  HA WK FI RE98  12:30, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Lol, I re-did it, and it made the shading wird! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 16:57, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, It dose have earpink, I defined the shading, and I sharpenedthe pattern. <font color="#6633FF"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 19:55, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Did you sharpen the pattern up? This is still too overblurred.

Half Moon (Alt Healer) - For Approval
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Can you define the shading some? This is gorgeous. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 03:08, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Can I ask for a second opinion? I had more defined shading on this when I first made it, and it didn't really look too great. ​​

I think the shading is defined enough.  HA WK FI RE98  03:19, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

I think it could be defined a bit more on the hind leg furthest from us. 03:24, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Rock (Healer) ~ For Approval
give this man anti wrinkle cream ASAP 03:28, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

You made him somewhat lovely, how, maybe defie the ear shading on the far ear? Malina457 (talk) 03:36, September 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Can you define the chest shading? I can bearaly see it. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 05:27, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the hind leg farthest from us.  HA WK FI RE98  12:26, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the facial shading? Also, there's some waste above the shoulder lineart. ​

Can you expand the shading on the limbs and define them? Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 04:55, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded just redid it. 20:48, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

Half Moon (Healer) ~ For Approval
this is not my best work but white cats are hard :/ <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:51, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and define the facial shading. ​

Lighten the chest so it stays consistent with your light source (it looks like it's coming from in front of her head?)  HA WK FI RE98  21:21, September 17, 2018 (UTC)