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Firestar(A) ~ For Approval


Okay archived the discussion and redid it. Comments? 05:28, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes by 2-3 pixels. 13:19, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink visable. Beautiful! :3 16:09, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wow Icy! This is amazing! And there is a brown/cream stripe on his tail..02:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 04:08, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ For Approval
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. 07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 00:22, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And smooth the shading too. It is blotchy in some places. 05:47, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Make the color match the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and tone down the highlights if you use them. Breeze whisker  21:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Starforce? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If Starforce isn't, may I work on this? 01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, not yet. It hasn't been a week. They get a full seven days. 02:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading. -- 00:11, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Starforce gave me permission to do this. I'll reupload ASAP 14:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail :P 01:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" tons, it needs to be lighter, and seriously smudge the earpink down. :3 03:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There's no highlights' to define. Add highlights to the face and front haunch. F i r e s t a r ! Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:30, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image so it matches the MC better, darken the shading, add shading to the herbs, and take the earpink color from the MC. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:40, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the eyes match the MC image... they look red. 01:32, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

A big chunk of the earpink is missing so fix that, and define/darken the shading. May just be me, but can you make the herbs different colors or is that unneeded? a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:43, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did I hated it so I just re-did it. 03:03, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and lighten the color of the eyes. 16:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

In his description it says he has long, feathery whiskers. I think his whiskers should be longer and he should get an extra whisker but I'm not sure. 18:34, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and add some depth to the eyes. I agree with Mountainheart on the whiskers thing :3 21:41 Wed Dec 21

Reuploaded I didn't add an extra whisker, I just made it longer like the MC image. 02:09, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged/blurred part of the ear closest to us. It also looks really dark, but if it's the same color picked off his MC image, then don't change it  04:19, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add the shading to the back leg farthest from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:34, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I just earsed all around the ear just to be sure and I took the ear pink from the other image. 00:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 01:08, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes aren't showing. 02:27, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, lighten the earpink to match the MC, and make the eyes more yellow-orange (amber) and less plain orange. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:55, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the eye color from the MC 17:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:44, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Reuploaded 20:56, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Make the eyes less red. Moonstorm88 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the MC. 22:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You took it from the wrong part. That's the shaded part of the eye. Take it from the middle color, not the darkest or lightest one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:13, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste on the outside of the front paw to the cat's right. 00:11, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Reuploaded Okay I killed teh waste! >:D 16:46, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, lighten the eyes and take the earpink from the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:14, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the ear pink and the eye color from the MC. I hope it looks better. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  18:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Blur the shading more and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also blur the highlights if there are any. 22:56, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  17:42, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear, make the shading more consistent, and define your light source. <span style="">10:50 Fri Dec 30

Define the highlights and perhaps lighten up the ear pink, or make it more red. The ear pink looks a bit brown to me. 18:33, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I dont use highlights, Dapple. And I re-did it becuase the shading was bugging me. Comments? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudged earpink. <span style="">00:01, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Reuploaded  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  02:10, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bum and smudge the earpink into the ear more so it looks like fur sticking into the ear. Also lighten the earpink a tad. <span style="">22:07 Sun Jan 1

'Reuploaded The shading on the bum is supposed to be that light because of my light sorce, but I did darken it a little bit. The ear pink is now taken from the MC  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  23:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the rump and tail shading. <span style="">01:24 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded okay that's it's blurred as I could get it on pixlr  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  02:36, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose and add shading to the herbs. I'm sure you can blur the tail shading a bit more. <span style="">01:42 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded Comments? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The back shading is darker than the rest of the shading, lighten it, or darken the face, tail and hindleg shading. <span style="">04:35 Sat Jan 7

Okay I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else says so. It's the correct shading placement. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define your light source and even out the shading; the back shading is darken than the rest, either lighten the back or darken the rest of the shading and define the shading on the herbs. 22:24, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay the light source is from the back. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:24, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh yeah and I redid it. Derp forgot to say that! Anyway comments? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  21:58, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ For Approval
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? <span style="">23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. <span style="">00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. <span style="">00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) <span style="">23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. <span style="">21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD <span style="">00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Doesn't everyone? ;) <span style="">23:22 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading and the highlights. 01:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and no offence, but the shading is blurred enough and to the max. <span style="">11:08 Thu Dec 15

Darken the shading, on the rump especially. And have you tried Gaussian blurring it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always use gaussian blur for shading. <span style="">00:56 Sat Dec 17

Darken the shading and blur it 22:07, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want to darken it, because it will turn out black. <span style="">22:13 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:07 Sun Dec 18

Darken the shading and blur it. Make sure you're using the pencil tool when you're drawing on the lineart for the torn ear, as right now some of the pixels are semi-transparent. <span style="">01:22 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded I did use the pencil, but I erased some of the ear off first. That's probably why. <span style="">18:56 Tue Dec 20

Darn it. I was hoping to get this once Bluestar's kit alt. I'm working on was approved, but, oh well. Anyways, this looks a little too gray, with not enough blue, to me. Bluestar11796 19:02, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe I wanted it too, so as soon as Frostfur's loner was approved I quick reserved it. I colour picked off one of her other image, so I'm not comfortable about changing it. <span style="">19:12 Tue Dec 20

Define/Add shading to the farthest back leg. It is in the apprentice tutorial shading placement. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:37, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is the artist's choice, as long as it makes sense and there is a definite light source. Plus, I'm pretty sure there are other tutorials that show the shading a different way. I don't see anything wrong with the shading, except fo the fact that the the neck shading looks too black. <span style="">4:29 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Oh, add depth to the eyes. <span style="">4:31 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Add shading to the back leg farthest away from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:18, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is depth in the eyes, plus it's my choice anyways, and the shading placement is my choice, and it's fine. <span style="">17:19 Wed Dec 21

Can you try to match the nose color with the other images? It just looks a little bit off to me. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:54, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It is off her leader image. So I don't intend to change it.<span style="">21:49 Fri Dec 23

Blur the smudged earpink. <span style="">23:47, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

I don't blur apprentice earpink, only smudge. :3 <span style="">01:29 Sat Dec 24

Sweetflower, I know you don't blur the earpink but it needs to be blurred, at least just a little. You can't blur by smudging of smudge by blurring. ;) Also, darken the shading on the hindleg farthest to us, and maybe lighten the shading on the flank just a tad. This is lovely. :3 22:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I caved. :D Just for you Stoneh! :P <span style="">03:11 Mon Dec 26

Make the highlight/lighter bit bigger on the face, and make all the highlights/lighter bits brighter. Also, make the belly completely shaded, chest and back foot farthest from us. And blur the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. I re-did her, she looked awful. <span style="">17:41 Wed Dec 28

I don't think changed are showing. <span style="">17:45 Wed Dec 28

Define the shading. I like this one. <span style="">01:55, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

(Just wondering) Can you see the changes? 'Caus eI can't. <span style="">02:15 Thu Dec 29

I think I can. thicken the lineart on the ear, and either add or brighten the highlights so it matched the leader image. Also, make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:41, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think you can see it Paleh! <span style="">18:55 Thu Dec 29

It's been 20 days, I think it's time this was CBA'd ._. 23:49, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be a nitpicker, but the slit in her ear needs to be sharper and the shading needs to be blurred more and darkened a tad. <span style="">10:52 Fri Dec 30

Re-uploaded. Nah, it's ok Wildheart. <span style="">17:12 Fri Dec 30

Restarting CBA. 22:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

O.e Ugh...So sorry but the highlights still need to be brightened a lot, on the leader image, they are like...silver. Bluestar is hard to do, I know, I tried tweaking the warrior version but I failed.... -- 17:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

o.e I don't use highlights. But if I have to add them I will.<span style="">19:48 Sat Dec 31

I agree with Stoney. You either need to add highlights or lighten the base colour a bunch and keep the shading at the same opacity it is now. <span style="">22:09 Sun Jan 1

Re-uploaded *Sigh* I didn't want to mess around with highlights, so I lightened the base colour. <span style="">02:18 Mon Jan 2

Still needs to be a bunch lighter. Check the leader image for reference. <span style="">02:01 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. <span style="">02:39 Tue Jan 3

Fix the nose, the shading placement looks off too. 20:39, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

The nose if fine, and the shading placement is my choice. <span style="">01:36 Wed Jan 4

Make the lineart completely black (not semi-transparent as it is now), blur the shading, and darken it. Make sure the shading extends to the lineart on the places where there aren't supposed to be "highlights". <span style="">01:44 Wed Jan 4 Re-uploADED. <span style="">02:10 Wed Jan 4

The blue seems too blue. Try to match it with her other images. Nice job! a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. Sorry for the wait y'all. <span style="">19:21 Thu Jan 5

Blur shadings A LOT 19:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Check the file page, changes aren't showing. <span style="">19:34 Thu Jan 5

Blur the shading still. 00:45, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">02:44 Sat Jan 7

The light source doesn't quite make sense. Fill the top of the haunch with shading and make a highlight in the middle of the back, add shading under the head and remove the light from her belly. Or if it's coming from eye-level from the front, move the tail highlight down. 04:38, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

And add another layer for the darker shading. <span style="">04:39 Sat Jan 7

o.e Ok, I tried to copy the apprentice tutorials, and I don't use highlights. I can tell this won't be approved by Monday, so I'm withdrawing.

May I take over, Sweet? 18:05, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Forgot to sign up there. And yeah, it's all your 'Teldy. (: <span style="">18:26 Sat Jan 7

I changed the heading if you don't mind. 20:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

If Bluestar's leader image will be tweaked to make it less purple, then won't this need to be redone?

Hopefully not. Reuploaded. 03:52, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 12:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! He should have more stripes. 12:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Icestorm has dibs on this image, did you get permission to do this image? 16:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even if you were allowed to, hmm. The eye needs more contrast in shades, and needs to be a tiny tad less neon Define the shading just a bit. 17:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm isn't active right now, so I don't know if she would be able to lay claim to any of her images. Try and thin out the middle of the stripes on the tail by a pixel or two. Also, the eyes look like they're blue with a tint of green. Did you color pick right from the warrior/deputy? 19:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even know Icestorm had dibs on the image... I actually just chose the color, since his eyes are an ice blue shade. 20:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon and add depth to them. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Move the stripes on his haunch closes to his head up further and make the top one longer. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon. 23:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes. 00:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Correct me if I am wrong,but could you defie the shading a tad bit. Otherwise, excellent job! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks really dark. Also could you define the shading on the whitish part of the tummy? a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink a bit and lighten the shading a bit. <span style="">00:54 Fri Dec 23 00:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

His image's stripes are being redone to look like Tigerstar's. Might as well do that here instead of the tweak page. ;) 03:43, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Be right back going to puke because of this >_>  19:20, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Awsome! Fix the stripes to look more like his warrior image. Moonstorm88 22:23, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

His warrior image needs to be redone Moon. Can you fix the angle of the stripes? I don't think it's natural for them to be diagonal like that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I made them look like Tigerstar's stripes, so that's why they look that way. 00:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are great, but they do need to be vertical. If you used layers, you can meddle around with it some and not have to redo them  04:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I posted his new warrior, so make the stripes match that, and don't forget the line along his back. 14:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took the colors from his new warrior image. 15:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, CBA? 20:57, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, yes, I'm interrupting. Smudge the chest more to match his warrior. 17:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, no, not like that. Use a smaller brush with the blur smudge tool and match his warrior. 18:05, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cha  18:19, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Did you look at the changed version? The changes aren't showing here. (Sorry that if looks like I removed your recent post on here, the wiki is being stupid.)  19:28, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Changes still aren't showing, and it's been a few hours. Try re-uploading again. 03:36, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Should be working now I hope. 11:03, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great ^^ Comments before approval? 17:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt: it's almost ready, but not quite. Smudge the white on the belly into the pelt some more so it looks like definitive fur-smudgies, darken the shading so it matches the other images, and add some depth to the eyes at the top and then I'll CBA this :3 <span style="">01:14 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded  14:26, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes should be a brighter blue. 04:38, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:59, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be darkened. <span style="">22:10 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded I fail so badly. When I went to darken the shading I realized I forgot to recheck the layer where I had the darkened shading. xD. Changes aren't showing. 22:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Haha it's cool I always forget to uncheck my "colour swatches" layer :P Define the smudgies on the belly some more. <span style="">22:46 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded  23:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on the belly. 14:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

The white on the belly is still too messy: I suggest redrawing that bit and re-smudging it. The shading needs to be darkened. <span style="">01:50 Wed Jan 4

Define and blur the shading. 21:52, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:01, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back stripe, smudge the belly a tad more, and make this --> ear a tad pinker. This is looking good, Silver! 04:40, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:59, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudges, it makes him look prickly -- 17:15, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Loudbelly (A) - For Approval
Posting this for Brightstripes bause she can't edit the page yet. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 13:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading a tad. 18:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink to give it a bit more of a realistic look. 18:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" on the haunch and shoulder a bit bigger. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it;s making her look black almost. <span style="">17:26 Sat Dec 17

Are you still working on this? And Sweet, Loudbelly is a boy =p  16:44, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit. 18:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It has been 8 days since this has been worked on. Declined. Somebody may take this over if they don't have two apprentice projects  18:57, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could I take over? Birdpaw got declined, so i dont know :l. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:26, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

No need to ask, just reserve it before someone else  19:28, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking over. It'll be reuploaded today or tomorrow. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and shading. Highlights were hard, though, because I don't use them. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:58, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading please, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">02:53 Sun Dec 25

He has waste between the whiskers and smudged lineart on both of the ears. 21:31, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, not just the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:43, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? It's been five days. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it really? it always fails for me. I added transperency.... I hope >.<  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 21:30, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 22:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I actually quite like this. I lightened the shading and smudged and blurred the earpink which i hadn't done before. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 20:31, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 22:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'd suggest taking a look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement as right now I don't really understand where your light source is. <span style="">22:14 Sun Jan 1

The lineart is blurred/smudged. <span style="">01:15, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Define and blur the shading a lot, and I'm not sure, but I think there's waste around the lineart. 00:29, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 04:42, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) ~ For Approval
My least favorite charart :\ FerretclawLover 16:24, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Why, shes cute! Smudge her ear-pink into her ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Define the tail shading a tad. 18:16, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REUPLOADED, the reason is that she just isn't up to what I call the Icewish Standard. She's average :\ FerretclawLover 18:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more on either side of where you've already smudged it 20:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, is this what you mean? I got a little confused so I just did what I think you're saying...FerretclawLover 20:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The face shading needs to be more defined. The shading chart in the tutorials shows shading on the face, and it is hard to see if it was added. Otherwise great job! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not actually sure whether I put face shading or not...FerretclawLover 17:57, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cheshire, the shading placement is artists choice, as long as it makes sense, than it's fine. ;) <span style="">23:44 Wed Dec 21

Blur the earpink. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  23:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like disagreeing but I think the earpink looks fine. :)  14:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think the earpink should be fixed, so it looks like it going into the ear, not into the pelt. (if that makes any sense at all) And blur the shading on her belly tons, looks darken than the rest of it. 17:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED  17:40, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 21:03, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for inturupting, but can you please lighten the back paw shading on the heel, and the belly shading? It's darker than the rest of the shading. <span style="">18:15 Tue Dec 27

I think the intensity of it is fine (don't lighten it) but I also think the shading could be defined on the chest, neck, and front foot. Also make sure the shading is the same darkness at the top of the hind leg farthest from us if not darker. <span style="">10:59 Fri Dec 30

It has now been a week and two days. Anyone that wants this can take over. If not, it's archived in 24 hours. 04:36, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 15:45, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did the shading instead, wait for changes. 15:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

OMG please don't decline this! I really want to continue doing this! If you decline it then it's my fault :| *kicks self*  18:34, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Icewish, but you didn't work on this promptly enough, so this image is now Moonleaf's. Could you lighten the base coat, Moon? <span style="">22:19 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded 04:46, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. <span style="">04:48 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded 18:36, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the shading over her head going to her tail. 00:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded You mean the waste? I noticed that, but waited until someone else pointed that out? 00:26, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 00:42, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:35, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the haunch and tail and define the light on the face. 04:45, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Was in a rush... 18:22, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Boulderpaw (A) ~ For Approval
My first apprentice ^^. Tell me what you think. 17:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Smudge pelt into earpink. ,17:52,December 23,2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he be short-haired, since he's a WindClan cat? 18:14, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh really? He has to be a short-haired? 19:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, yes, since all WindClan cats get short-haired images, unless they were described as long-haired. 20:39, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I'll fix it. 00:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight/lighter part go along with the light source better. There's no possible light source that could make it go in the middle of the tail like that, straight through. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:25, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:42, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the whole thing kinda blurry? Like you resized it or something. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is a bit smaller than the blank. Fix it. 03:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink could be lighter and more blurred. 06:45, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same as the others it's 139x134. Or is that wrong? I agree it looks smaller but when I resized it to 139x134 just like all the others it was the same. Even in the file it shows that size. 18:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

You resized it? That's probably the problem. First off, that would be why this looks blurry, and second, the canvas size may not be the same as the other blanks from the start, so when you resized it, the canvas size matched, btu the blank didn't. You may have to redo. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:34, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I just make it bigger so it is easier to work with but then on others when I save it, it goes back to the normal size. I'll redo it if you want me to. 17:03, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Is it better? 17:54, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink. <span style="">18:28 Mon Dec 26

The lineart is still blurred. I can fix it for you if you want me to. <span style="">00:47, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Nah I got this DJ..@Sweet do you mean make the color duller or dull the earpink I have on there? 18:55, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 19:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around the image, darken and redden the earpink, darken the base coat, and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:40, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

He still looks blurry, and that image is definitely smaller than the blank. 03:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder, I think, you must redone it, Im sorry for first, I saved it into my computer and looked closer, the lineart is whole blurred, whole. Im sorry but it cant be approvet if you dont fix that. ,21:29,December 28,2011

Re-Uploaded I think it's finally right. 23:53, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

YUes, the lineart looks good. Smude the pelt into the earpink a bit more. <span style="">02:06, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

And make the earpink redder and darker, and either fill in, or darken the nose. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:33, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I know the earpink is horrible. xD 03:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the ear more so it looks like fur. <span style="">11:35 Fri Dec 30

Re-Uploaded 16:04, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 17:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 23:20, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Where's your light source? If it's from the back, make sure the stomach and chest are completely shaded, and enlarge the shading on the front of the haunch and shoulder. Blur all the shading as well. <span style="">22:23 Sun Jan 1

I looks to me almost as if he has a stripe on his hind leg. But that maybe be the shading. Breeze whisker  00:59, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="">02:05 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uploaded 00:05, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, add a highlight to the back, and remove the highlight on the chest; it looks like the light is coming from beneath him. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:40, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded And I didn't see a highlight on the chest O.o Or do you mean the one one his front leg? Anyway Re-Uploaded. 00:26, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a tad more. <span style="">01:18, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Re-Uploaded 03:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define your light source. Make the haunch highlight a bit smaller and make the back highlight a bit bigger. 04:46, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll fix the earpink and the blotchy patch near his hind leg.

Re-Uploaded

Blur the shading near the back more, and smudge the pelt into the earpink. I notice that it is like that on all apprentices.

Re-Uploaded 02:00, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image -- 17:13, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt.L) - For Approval
This is for when she was described as gray in the allegiances of TFW. I got ears and eyes off of her alternate deputy. She was described as just gray. Not light or dark, so I didn't colour pick off one of her alts for her pelt color. Comments? <span style="">16:56 Sun Dec 25

Lovely! Ligthen her up a bit, she looks almost black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:03, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar is shorthaired. Very nice, Sweet. 17:04, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't all RiverClan cats long-haired? <span style="">17:17 Sun Dec 25

All her other images are shorthaired, and, she may have gotten the shorthaired gene from her ThunderClan parent. o3o 17:23, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm a derp face. Never mind me. :P <span style="">17:36 Sun Dec 25

Make the nose darker and either smudge/blur the earpink more. 19:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, also she's shorthaired because she was described as sleek. 20:27, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">01:56 Mon Dec 26

Lighten her, she looks dark gray. Make her nose pink, since she was described with one, and blur the earpink and make it less purple. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:22, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">15:36 Mon Dec 26

Re-uploaded. Dulled the ear-pink and nose. <span style="">18:33 Mon Dec 26

Can you make the eye color match the regular leader version? 23:51, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">17:03 Wed Dec 28

Add/define the depth in her eyes, and redden and darken the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The eyes won't look like her leader eyes, because I had to make the depth more "visible". <span style="">18:48 Thu Dec 29

The earpink's way too hot pink right now, dull it a ton, darken it, and redden it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:17, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. (I colour picked the earpink off the chart, and reddened it. <span style="">17:33 Fri Dec 30

Make her nose gray. 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

She was described with a pink nose. <span style="">17:51 Fri Dec 30

I think it's me but I see some waste above the ears. If not then smudge the pelt into the ears some more and blur the shading. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:18 Sat Dec 31

Give her a gray nose, make her ear-pink a bit paler, and define the shading on the tail. 21:14, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded She has a pink nose, it's in her description. <span style="">02:24 Mon Jan 2

Make the nose less bright, and also the ear pink in <-- this ear is only halfway filled. If you get what I mean. Fill the whole ear with the earpink. 14:31, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The ear is like that because her fur could be infront of it.<span style="">22:23 Mon Jan 2

Make sure all the shading is the same darkness. <span style="">02:07 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. <span style="">19:51 Thu Jan 5

Define the haunch highlight, blur the ear-pink a bit more, and give the shading some depth; it looks a bit flat. 04:47, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't use highlights. <span style="">19:17 Sat Jan 7

Re-uplaoded. <span style="">19:20 Sat Jan 7

Smudge the pelt into the earpink on the left side more, and if you can, do the right ear too.

The ears are fine, the hair in the ear ain't perfect hun. (: <span style="">22:52 Mon Jan 9

Lionblaze (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
Okay, before anyone bickers, he was described as Orange as an apprentice. Any way, comments for improvement? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  17:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match the warrior charart and dull the ear pink and smudge it into the ear. Blur the stripes and make them piontier. 17:35, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sand, it doesn't need to match the warrior charart. If anything, make it look more orange, and less golden. Beautiful. 17:37, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  17:48, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The paws look yellow.. 20:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  20:21, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image seems to bright/yellow. Desaturate the image a tad and make it have a slightly more orange hue. Also, sumdge the pelt into the earpink a tad more. 20:25, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  00:51, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make it more orange, blur/smudge the stripes, and lower the highlights or darken the shading. 00:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love the smudge tool. Any way, comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  01:36, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, Rainy! Blur the ear-pink abit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks Maple. So happy for the smudge tool to be there. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  01:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

---> This eye (at the top) looks pink-ish tinted. It might be my conputer, but could you make them more orange. <span style="">03:25 Mon Dec 26

It's the same as the warrior image. I'll change it if someone agrees to it. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  04:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree with Sweet on this. 07:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your screens. It's not pink. It's amber. 19:04, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Agreeing with Twi here, its fine. Can you make the tear in his ear go a bit deeper? I know its supposed to look the warrior image, but right now it looks odd. 21:24, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Like the pixil closest to the white pupil thing it pink tinted, it really looks like it's pinky/orange. <span style="">21:31 Mon Dec 26

I opened it up on Pixlr and zoomed in, its fine in my opinion. 22:19, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 03:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think I did this one when I just joined PCA, and it got declined. Shouldn't this be declined as well? 17:20, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't have an image with the old blanks. Do you have a quote from when he was described? 19:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well, maybe after it was declined, they deleted the file, then Rainy posted it back up. 20:17, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

But wouldn't it have a delete log on it? 20:19, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well the same thing happened with a lot of alts, including Bluestar's. Sometimes as the members change, our opinions change I guess. If pale ginger (sandstorm) is different from orange, golden is too, so I think this should stay. Make him a bit brighter. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ya, a friend told me to say that if someone tried to get it declined. 04:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink slightly and make the torn ear follow the line of the back of the ear more, if that makes any sense. Just make sure the left side of the torn ear doesn't flip back unnaturally. <span style="">22:36 Sun Jan 1

Re-uploaded. Comments? 22:57, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the lineart on the back of the torn ear longer? Now it kinda looks like the top of his ear was chopped off XD <span style="">02:09 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:28, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and darken the shading a bit. 04:50, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I made it worse! Comments? 03:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) ~ For Approval
Ugh, this is horrible. Comments? 23:43, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink fill the entire ear and make it more visible 23:45, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, but, the white in the eye goes where there is one less black...If that made any sense. 23:49, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the shading, on the tail especially. This is nice! 23:53, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the dapples a lot. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  20:57, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, it'll be re uploaded shortly. 15:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Sorry Twilight, but I didn't get what you meant. Mind telling me again? 15:27, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Ya' know where on the blanks, the pupils in the eyes are two pixels wide until the top, where the right pixel is white? You didn't fill that in to black when you added the eye highlight on the other side. Just edit the lines so that those spots are black. Breeze whisker  15:57, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed eye. 21:29, January 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

The dapples should be dark grey, not black. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:01, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, lighten and redden the ear-pink, give her a gray nose, and darken the shading. 04:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smokepaw (A) ~ For Approval
A space?! Do my eyes decieve me?? :O 00:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading 00:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. 20:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Defien the tail shading, and add some shading to the belly. <span style="">00:12, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Reuploaded The belly already had shading, so I just defined it along with the tail shading. 02:34, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading and smudge the earpink into the ear more. <span style="">00:50 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded Darkened/defined the shading.. I can never seem to get the earpink right... But I smudged/blurred it too. 19:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the stomach so it matches the rest of the shading. <span style="">22:44 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded Darkened the stomach shading. 02:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stomach shading more consistent or add a little patch of "highlights", whichever you prefer. <span style="">02:14 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded I kind of redid it, since I didn't like the old version of mine. xP  01:31, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and/or define it. Great job Misty! <span style="">06:19, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. Thanks DJ! 22:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more around the shoulders and head. 04:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does this look good? 15:32, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur(A)~ For Approval
Here he is! Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Take out the shredded ears. We typically assume that the injuries occur in the warrior rank unless the cat is mentioned with them as a kit or apprentice. 16:02, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Do i remove the scars aswell or not? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I imagine when his ears got shredded those scars came along with it as well. Give him a gray nose unless he's like his sister and has a pink one 16:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

* shakes head* he has a pink nose. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:18, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:39, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the earpink and darken it a bit, smooth out the shading on the haunch, it's a bit blotchy, and make the highlight/lighter part of the tail go all to way down, not just at the tip. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay....sorry i was busy....I'll get to it in a second.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink. And it looks like he has a lighter muzzle. 12:19, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawning, read what i said on Rosepetal.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? 13:18, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, alright I completely redid it. I have been wanting to do Stonefur's apprentice and now I can! 14:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I changed the heading if thats alright..... 01:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, define the light on the face and back, and darken the shading on your haunch 05:06, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I can't work on this today because I have this on a different computer. 14:26, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Beetlenose (A) ~ Withdrawn
Here he is. Comments? 16:52, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him up, then add shading. The lineart is very hard to see. 17:28, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is my computer or does he look like a really dark brown but not black. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your computer and '''re-uploaded. ''' 20:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC) I can barely see the shading. Darken or define it. <span style="">00:31, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Re-Uplaoded. 22:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour a lot and add some depth to the eyes. <span style="">22:54 Sun Jan 1

Blur the earpink a lot. 03:18, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour more and blur the shading. Smudge the earpink into the ear with a smaller brush so it looks like fur. <span style="">02:23 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. 21:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">02:15 Wed Jan 4

Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot. 23:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and shoulder 05:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. 16:38, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe lighten the shading on the face...? It looks a little dark on my screen... 17:54, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this. My time on Wikia "has been limited", says Mom and Dad. 01:18, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. I withdrew Firestar  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  04:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay it doesn't look like it, but it's different. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:35, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Mosspelt (A) ~ For Approval
Since it's been two weeks and Dapple didn't upload it, I decided to do this. Comments? 00:01, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white some more. <span style="">00:49, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Darken the black, and I'm not sure if there already is or not, but make sure you have both ginger and tan on her. That's what she has in her queen image, even if it's not that noticeable. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:09, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

She's kinda flat. Define and/or darken the shading. Breeze whisker  04:02, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't darken the black because I got the color from her queen. 14:20, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

She still feels flat. Blur, blur, blur. -- 01:25, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Her patches need to look, furry, like the queen, and smudge them into the grey/black more. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 01:59, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Heheh, I couldn't put it on cause the spaces were all filled every time I went on. Oh well, I don't mind. You should define the shading. 03:12, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:43, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Her patches should be more ginger. 04:08, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:09, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Patches don't look like Mosspelt's. Fix that please :)  12:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm waiting for a second opinion on that, since I made sure all the patches matched. 12:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, they don't. They look too smudged and the patches are two different colors on this. 14:24, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

They are supposed to be two different colours. Could you darken the earpink farthest from us a bit, even though it's in light? 18:08, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:10, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
I wasn't sure what color the nose should be, and I know I have to lighten the shading. Comments? 17:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:00, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

He needs to be long furred 17:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's why he looked so messed up. 19:00, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

The nose has to be black, if you were wondering. ♫Purplemoon♪  Stay up until Midnight  22:49, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

No one has commented on this in two days. 16:27, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Patience, Wildfire. Smudge the earpink into the ear some more, make the white shiny in the eye smaller, and darken the shading on the top of the farthest hind leg. Lovely job. <span style="">00:44 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded I'm going to get rid of the waste later I have to do HW 01:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Reuploaded -- 22:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:33, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:54, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Foxleap (A) ~ For Approval
Tabbies aren't my strong point but I tried. :D 01:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. This looks great! 01:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I love the stripes! ♫Purplemoon♪  Stay up until Midnight  01:48, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:59, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and define the "highlights". I luff dis! 02:11, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay not everybody used highlights, and thats pretty much making them brighter. The nose is supposed to be gray. Define the stripes. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:49, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is not supposed to be gray. It's only supposed to be gray on gray cats, and black on black cats. Lighten the whole image, define the shading, blue the stripes, and try and make them match the warrior a bit better. Maybe add more? I'm not sure, I just know it doesn't really match right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose isn't gray... nevermind you were talking to sandstorm, I took the colors from his old apprentice and warrior images, I'll fix the shading and 'highlights' 15:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:32, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

This also hasn't been commented on in two days. 16:29, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Again, patience. Make the white shinies smaller, define the stripes, lighten the base colour, and smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">02:30 Tue Jan 3

Can you make his stripes to look more like the ones on his warrior image? 21:08, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took all colors from his warrior, I lightend the image but just saying, also what do you want me to do to fix the stripes? -- 01:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know what it is, but the image doesn't really seem to match, at least stripes-wise. I'd say add highlights, personally, 'cause it seems like there are highlights on the other image. <span style="">02:24 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded 00:42, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink paler; don't worry if it doesn't match. 05:10, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:55, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchfur (A) ~ For Approval
I think this is the last spot! This is my first as an apprentice, from 02:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! There's some waste by the ear on ---> that side and on that side of the tail. This is great Mooneh! Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:47, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks! 02:56, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's specks of waste around the charart, and part of the earpink closest to us leaked onto the back of the ear, could you erase that? 03:07, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Just tell me if you see any more waste, I tried to get it all. 03:23, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 03:24, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Smudged, got rid of the waste. 03:43, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the... I don't know if that's a highlight or part of the normal fur, "spot" on the haunch a tad. 14:34, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's a chunk of waste below the hind paw closest to us, and flecks of waste around his paws. 17:13, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''So much waste! XD 19:03, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the hindleg. <span style="">19:54 Sat Dec 31

Re-uploaded. I blurred. =3 22:15, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Is the haunch highlighted? If so lighten it. 16:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Light enough? 20:27, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the face a bit. Looks nice :3. I dont know if its my computer, but there is a little waste on the sides of the tail.--User: Fallenstars 23:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The highlight on the haunch seems to be too big. Make it kind of rounder and smaller. 03:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I really made it worse, but see to it. =3 21:42, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

There is still some waste around the tail. 21:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If there's any more waste, I'm a mouse. =3 22:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a mouse ;) there's some above his tail. Smudge the earpink into the ear some more. <span style="">02:33 Tue Jan 3

There is also some more waste near the base of his tail. 21:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *squeaks like a mouse* I know there's more waste...go ahead, point it out. XD 22:04, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on both of his hind paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  01:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

And around his head. 04:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy =3 21:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The part at the base of the tail looks kind of like a highlight, darken that part. 01:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is that better, or too dark? I smudged and blurred it a lot to blend it in but still be darker. 03:46, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Leafpool (MCA) ~ For Approval
Heh... I like drawing her stripes. Comments? :3 20:51, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose pink is barely visible. Can you define it? 23:31, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little. Wow, you did great with the stripes! ♫Purplemoon♪  Stay up until Midnight  23:52, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

You did a much better job than me! Blur all the shading, and lighten the shading in the middle of the body. 12:13, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't notice it was you doing this. X3 Define the tail shading. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:47, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh he he. :3 00:02, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it blends in with the fur too much. 23:20, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:11, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit pinker. 05:11, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:49, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white chest a little more. Excellent, m'dear. 00:57, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:04, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MCA) ~ For approval
First charart, comments? 22:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Forgot to make transparent, made it transparent. 22:44, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! but you have to do these things. 1. Take the colors from the MC, that includes the ear pink and eye color. 2. Smudge the ear pink into the ear more and blur it. 3. I can barely see the nose pink, if there is any. 4. make the pattern match the MC, because it has to match. Wow that's a lot of stuff xD  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  22:48, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Add colour to the nose, it's white. <span style="">22:56 Sat Dec 31

Re-uploaded I tried to match the MC the best I could. Took all colors from her MC image. 23:18, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Her face looks gray. Lighten the shading if its that. -- Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan!  23:23, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

I see youre trying to match. Her color is lovely, Leafy :-) Just try to sharpen stripes and make them more zig-zag looking, just play with it and dont be scary, you taken a really brave choice.. ,24:25,December 31,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried... <:3 00:51, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes need to be sharper and zigzagy still. Don't blur the stipes that much. Also redden/darken the earpink, so it's a hot pink color. Other then that, this is great for a first charart. <span style="">01:57, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Re-uploaded I think I made it worse D: 03:51, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, It looks like you havent changed anything. And dont waste it, spend on that cat more time. Dont be such *mouse-brained* xD Why you dont try match the stripes more? Its not worse, only wasted. Try make more stripes too. ,19:21,January 2,2012 (UTC)

Well said, Leafstorm. If it helps, I'm pretty sure that Icestorm used the "Ripple" tool which in GIMP is under "Filters". 02:51, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I don't think I'm ready for Mothwing yet. So I'm withdrawing this. 21:08, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, then I'll take over. 01:23, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Are you working on this? Its been four days. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  22:02, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm working on this. Remember, I have a week to upload, not 4 days. Re-Uploaded. 23:14, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look...thicker on the other images, the eyes look different shades and could you blur the shading, perhaps? 02:09, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (Alt. Lo) - CBA
I reserved this before the decision was made to redo the loner blanks, so I'm allowed to post this. I messed up the filename, it's supposed to be Snake (BC).loner.alt, could an admin move this to the correct name? Otherwise it just kinda wastes space. 06:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ass ADD (XD) shading to the collar and the back ear. And I THINK this is supposed to be shorthaired, but correct me if I'm wrong. :P Good job luff. ^^


 * laughs butt off* ^^Best typo EVER. Anywhoo, blur the earpink and make it smaller - 18:38, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Poor person who made that typo, define the back leg shading. <span style="">01:19 Tue Jan 3

It was Paleh xD I've added the unsigned thingy so people will know. Nothing about the image for me, just do what everyone else said ^^ 01:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh goodness, I fail.... XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:56, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded XD poor Paleh! And no because his rogue alt is longhaired  19:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the border and there's this weird darker grey thing on his right front leg. 04:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:02, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the white ear (I think that'd be in shadow) and define the highlights a bit more. (And if you don't use highlights, then where the shading isn't xP) Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:30, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:32, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nearly two days without a comment, let's go CBA  21:41, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) (A) ~ For Approval
I love this :3 Second charart, comments? Solids are easy! :3 16:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Lighten the back paws shading. (And only remove the color chart if you don't need it) 16:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Stupid me x3 Forgot to remove the color spots. 16:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Again. Cropped image. 17:24, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot and darken the base color ,19:24,January 2,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:11, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and where the pelt meets the earpink. 21:14, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dang! I wanted to do this :\ Lighten the shading a lot. And the nose shouldn't be gray. 12:12, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur shading a lot too, hey Leafy if you want help, just ask. Sorry if...im just trying help ,18:34,January 5,2012 (UTC)

The shading should be in the chest, muzzle and stomach aswell, not just around the edge of the image. Also define the depth in the eye. <span style="">06:31, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

I'm at school I'll try to re-upload when I get home. 16:16, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded What color should the nose be, then? And I didn't change the shading or the eye because I have read comments before that have said that shading and eye depth is the artist's choice. Sorry if I sound mean. 21:15, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I blurred the shading, though. And I meant shading placement. 21:17, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Any comments? 15:06, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the paw shading. <span style="">23:00 Mon Jan 9

Owlclaw (A) - For Approval
Haha space :-) ,19:17,January 2,2012 (UTC)

There are less stripes on the warrior image, can you erase some? 19:20, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yea, Reuploaded ,19:32,January 2,2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot to fill in the nose. o3o <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 00:53, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

No..its filled ,19:03,January 3,2012 (UTC)

In that case, define it o3o. 22:24, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Match the stripes with his new warrior. 12:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I have done the new warrior, it looks good to me, defined nose, reuploaded ,18:30,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and define the white pixel in the eye. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:28, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,19:25,January 6,2012 (UTC)

There's evil waste all around the image. I demand you to kill it. XD 10:14, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Oh..killed xD ,12:26,January 7,2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (A) - For Approval


Never thumb an image. Also, you have to re-upload this over Cedarheart's apprentice image. Also, make the ear-pink fill the ear completely. Add depth to the eyes, blur teh shading and highlights a lot. 21:30, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is it? This might be a stupid question, cause I'm not a computer wizard, but what does "thumb" mean? *dies of embarassment*

It means it has the frame around it, or something and says who it was added by. Blur highlights (if there are any) and blur ear-pink, a lot, and define shading. Also, don't forget to sign with ~ 22:49, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, but can someone help me delete the thumbed one? I can't seem to find a way to do it..... sorry. 23:04, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, blur it plenty more, the ear-pink still needs to fill the ear completely, define the shading. 23:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should Add depth to the eyes... 02:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink, its too hot pinkish. Rainface, Leafy already said to define the shading. :P 21:13, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I just need I reminder on define-ing shading on gimp 2.6, and then I'm covered. Also, I don't want to be rude, but Rainface on your second comment what do you want me to blur? the shading or the earpink? help? 21:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste where haunches are and it seems flat. Plus it seems like you smudged where you need to blur. Shading could be gaussian blurred. 08:05, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you added shading so you need to add some. Darken the nosepink. Blur the highlights a ton, though that was already mentioned, I think. And Twi, adding depth to the eyes is the artist's choice. 12:10, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

She knows Ferret, It's just a suggestion. The earpink needs to fill the whole ear, than the pelt smudged into it. <span style="">20:01 Thu Jan 5

In my opinion, I think the nose color is find. I think you should lighten it just a tad instead. 20:59, January 5, 2012 (U

Reuploaded I did everything except gaussin blur. I'll be on vacation for couple days as well 15:20, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more reddish-gray, like his warrior & elder images, and blur the highlights (If someone's already said this, just disregard it). 04:36, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and darken the shading. 16:33, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a whole bunch. It looks too blotchy.

Littlecloud (A) ~ For Approval
All colors are from his medicine cat. Comments? 08:35, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more, on the sides of the earpink. <span style="">17:45 Tue Jan 3

Define the stripes and color his nose brown. 20:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Thinen out the shading on the haunch if that makes sence. <span style="">01:51, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Reuploaded. Naw, I got that, DJ ;) But I think I broke Littlecloud...and the burn tool hates me. XO 02:56, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded really quick. I think I fixed him ^^; 10:18, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sootfur (A) - For Approval
Yeah...my terrible pixlr skills right here. :S 02:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Terrible? Who's terrible? Certainly not you. Add some shading to the top of the head or move the "highlight" on the haunch up to clarify your light source, and make sure the belly is completely shaded :3 <span style="">02:11 Wed Jan 4

I'm terrible. Tone down the highlights a bit. 03:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image. 03:20, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I luv this :D Who says pixlr stinks? I use it! Blur the earpink a tad. 22:17, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oooh so pretty! Lighten the shading. :)  12:07, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I never said Pixlr stinks x3 23:54, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

All of my images are made on pixlr *trollface* Anywhoo, define the tail shading 21:19, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A) - For Approval
Here she is, Tawnyfur! I know it's a fail. I haven't done a real charart since 2010. So therefore, you shall reteach me (yes, I looked at the tutorials)! So.....Bring On The Critism! Oh yeah...I may re-do the shading if I have to......again, sorry, it fails. 07:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Figured out how to fix shading and other stuff. -- 08:43, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I love fixing stuff in the course of a few hours. Oh, and for those who don't recognize the name..... look in the first arc, somewhere between books 3-6 -- 10:04, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. This time I gaussian blurred it. But I left waste *dies* I'll try to remove it... hopefully. -- 10:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you =3 20:56, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred. 21:03, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around the image. 21:11, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading and according to my wand tool, I removed all the waste. Does the ear look weird? 22:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear looks good, but the pelt needs to be smudged into the earpink. Also, there looks like there i slighter fur next to the ear. 22:21, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There you go. -- 23:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 00:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 23:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure the whole belly is shaded. <span style="">06:43, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Reuploaded. Turns out I was blurring the earpink instead of smudging. Oops. Oh, and I did this without smudging the earpink that much, beacause I've got somewhere to be, so please wait, remind me, and I'll uploade later today/tommorrow 14:59, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? 01:36, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded wrong version. Once again, comments on my now beautiful Tawnyfur? 05:12, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

It's been about two days. Comments? 06:00, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. Also, can we tweak her images to look more golden brown? This is yellow, not golden brown. If we do, then we might as well start with the apprentice while it's up, so change that if anyone agrees. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred, but I didn't change the color. Please don't make me start over. Isn't the only thing that matters is that the image matches the warrior's image? 07:28, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more  17:09, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart (A) ~ For Approval
I was kind of waiting for Sky to reserve this, but she never did, so I just went for it. x3 It feels good to be going back to Skyheart, her warrior version was my first charart. I feel so nostalgic. Anyways, I tried doing the stripes the way I made them on her warrior, so they should match decently. Colors are taken from warrior. Comments? 04:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Dude, you shoulda just asked me, I would have happily given it away, since I hate mine. ^^ Smudge the fur into the earpink a wee bit more, and blur the shading, and maybe lighten it up some. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 04:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sky didn't reserve it because I asked to do it xD. This is so much better than what I would have come up with. Lighten the shading at the feet in the back. 12:14, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Erm...*runs* And I think the stripes should be a bit lighter, like teh warrior. 8D <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:34, January 6, 2012 (UTC).

Reuploaded. Heh. Sorry, Silver. x3 03:39, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (A) ~ For Approval
The warrior image needs to be tweaked. I'll try to do that as soon as I finish Mousefur's images. Comments? 04:06, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 04:09, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be much lighter :P she's supposed to be "pale light brown". <span style="">04:33 Thu Jan 5

Re-uploaded Psssshh I knew that XD *headdesk* 05:01, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Haha of course you did :P lighten it a bit more. <span style="">05:14 Thu Jan 5

Re-uploaded XP 05:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

No earpink on right ear. 17:40, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

There is earpink, it just needs to be defined. Also, you deleted my comment, Ferret. What it said was: I think the nose should be pink...It is on her kit image. ;3 16:25, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:14, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I am withdrawing this to do a different one. I promised Stony she could have this. -- 01:04, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over? 01:12, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Of course ^^ 01:14, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (A) ~ For Approval
Oh yes, I got the pretty Icecloud. I actually asked some users for feedback so that I could fix it before I put it for approval. I'm really proud of this :) 12:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more, and decrease the shading on top of the haunch. 21:49, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  22:53, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Message from Ferret: I can't upload today so i'll upload tomorrow :)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (A) ~ For Approval
I decided to do a new style because his entire image was bothering me for some reason. I honestly think it should be redone, sorry for whoever made it. If you want me to follow the old style I will but I like this style much better, though. 12:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If this is the style that's going to be kept, can you define the stripes? I can barely see them... 16:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Eh...not trying to sound like a derp but how do you define stripes? 17:39, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You paint over them. 19:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, you don't really have to paint over them, but sometimes I darken them a tad, or re-blur them. 03:32, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

It looks kinda flat, darken/define/add shading. <span style="">06:49, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Message from Ferret: I'm declining this because this is just..ew

@anon: huh? 17:07, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) - Withdrawn
Yay for missing school~ It means I get to work on chararts. =P Anyway, by the looks of it, this hasn't been approved yet, or reserved, so, comments? *Shading Fail* Yes I see the waste. I'll fix that, along with the shading. =3 16:54, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Good job Twi! On the right ear, the black smudges too far up into the ear. Make it so the whole ear is pink. 17:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Leopard. 17:09, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, lighten the shading a lil' or blur it. And i'm not sure the scratch/scar on her eye should be there because in the manga she doesn't have it in the beginning. 17:12, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should indeed be there. But define it a lot, maybe lighten it. 17:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:52, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know how it is with black cats, but I can not see shading or highlights at all, so define highlights. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 23:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I never use highlights. ^^ Define the shading, then? 23:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 23:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I think the scar looks a bit too thick. Possibly make it a bit thinner? 12:41, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawn due to my computer being broken and not having the files on the Dell. 18:40, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

If I am allowed too, may I take over? 20:06, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask  04:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Alt. W) - For Approval
Okay, before you say anything, the book is in greyscale, so I figured he should be grey. If people disagree, I can easily change it to something else. 23:23, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I think it should stay as it is. Perhaps, redden the earpink? 23:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, he has a white muzzle anyways. Define the tail shading. 00:01, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

He was brown on the cover, shouldn't he be brown? 01:06, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

We don't know that's him. Besides, that cat has white paws. 02:25, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:21, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

enlarge the shoulder and haunch highlight 21:13, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:08, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Weaselfur (A) ~ CBA
Got permission to redo the pattern since the warrior image needs to be redone anyway (lineart's messed up bad). And yeah, that's how Shelly do! >8D Comments? 06:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think he only has white paws.. And they look a tad bit cream. Awesome job, Shelly! ;3 21:37, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Your right. Maybe blur/smudge the stripes abit more. They look hard edged to me. 23:05, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Cats with white paws almost always have white elsewhere on their body, typically on the tail and the muzzle. I'd really rather keep it for realism's sake. 01:04, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

...I think your taking this "realism" thing too far but okay. xD Do what I said in my comment before and I think you forgot to fill in the nose 01:15, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, maybe. :\ Look, if someone else agrees, I'll take the white off this tail and muzzle. 01:20, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's alright. It's just something minor. I'm just worried we might start doing this on every tabby eventually by assuming stuff based on realism. And then, all the newbies sees this and starts complaining all like: "OMGZZ u gaiz r so st00pid It doesnt matche teh descriptions!!!111" I just saying we should only make the chararts based soley in cited descriptions, so it wouldnt upset dem Warriors fans, ya know? xD 01:35, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I think the white on the tail and muzzle (and the eys?) should be taken off too, I agree with Bloo. Cool 3D effect! <span style="">02:03, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Re-uploaded. (sigh) I reel I did him a disservice, but oh well. 02:35, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome, darken both the earpink and eye 21:09, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:03, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Been a while with no comment. CBA? 02:06, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (A) - For Approval
Ewwwww, comments? 21:26, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

His stripes look more brown then golden.. 21:43, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Thats how they are on his warrior and kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:35, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

No, they're definitely more brown. 00:58, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, they are. If I'm correct, is the earpink ment to be smudged into the ear, not out of the earpink? <span style="">02:06, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Darken his base pelt, it looks too pale compared to his stripes. 12:59, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the whole entire thing, it was killing me. >.> -- 13:38, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Really good! All I would suggest is darkening the shading a tad more. 16:55, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Didn't we decide not to do triangle tabbies? 20:14, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the earpink, this looks great! 20:46, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I talked to Scarletwind, and she said that his images were fine. Brighten him to match his other pixels. 01:11, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (A) - For Approval
Trying a new stripe pattern because on his warrior and kit, all his stripes just look paint brushed on, not a real tabby. Comments? 05:57, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Nice! Blur the shading a bit. 12:44, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:47, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Alt.A) -For Approval


Er....yeah.....so......comments?.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:08, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the earpink a little more? 18:49, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I love Rowans :D Blur the shading more. 01:39, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oakfur (A) - For Approval
Here he is. He looks bad. Just a tad. Anyways, comments? <span style="">19:15 Sat Jan 7

Move the "highlighted" part on the haunch up a bit and blur it. 20:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 16:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pshaw, he looks fine. Just smudge the earpink a bit. -- 17:07, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Snoweh! <span style="">20:33 Sun Jan 8

Can you darken the nosepink and smudge/blur the earpink more into the ear? Looks great, Sweet! :3  01:22, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThanks. <span style="">00:20 Tue Jan 10

Spottedleaf (Alt. MC) - For Approval
First charart as a warrior! Anyways, I know the color isn't right, but I want your opinion on it first. Should it be gray, because the book is on gray scale, or a creamy gray color, because without the gray scale, it would be a color like that. The discussion is on the talk page. <span style="">03:33, Mon, Jan, 9, 2012

She's tabby. So brown is fine. 04:02, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Where is this alt from? It's not in the trivia. Add it please. And I can't really comment without knowing what this is supposed to be an alt for, so I'll just comment after it's added.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:12, January 9, 2012 (UTC)


 * Facepalm*, forgot about that. I added it and cited it. <span style="">01:47, Tue, Jan, 10, 2012

Stripes look flat 14:33, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Loudsplash, don't just say what's wrong, tell her how to fix it. Could you make her less purple-y? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:05, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, maybe smudge them a bit and blur them? And you can barely see shading on the stripes if any. 15:11, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (A) ~ For Approval
I am posting this behalf of Thistleshine who can't post this yet. Comments? 03:51, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fill the ear with earpink and add the highlights to the eyes. 03:54, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes and blur the highlights a lot. Also, define the shading. 04:08, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart all around, mainly on the paws. And add highlights/lighter part to the face. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:10, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color. 22:42, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (A) - For Approval
Well, I tried... Comments? 04:28, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on her back. 12:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (A) ~ For Approval
All of her colors are from her elder. Comments? 05:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sol's Father (Lo) - For Approval
He's bad. Don't mock me D: 17:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

He's not bad, just tone down the highlights or lighten the shading if you don't use highlights. Blue the shading around his belly as well as the tail shading. Make the earpink a tad bigger and I think you're all set! 17:06, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. LOL, such a long comment :D 17:12, January 10, 2012 (UTC)