Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 128

Daisy (Alt Q) - Approved
Yooo redone blanks

Blur/smudge the shading on the back by the ear. Also, define the shading on the front legs, and maybe add some beneath the head? The head would probably cast shadow, but if I'm being silly, ignore me. 10:07, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is icky so I'll probably redo it again.

Blur the shading a bit more? Especially on the forehead. Burntclaw (talk) 00:20, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I said I'd redo it so I have this now and I stole David's source. I like this one a biiiiit more- I'm just having tail shading issues.

Define the shading on the belly and front legs? 23:49, 12/2/2014

Re-uploaded.

Can you define the transition of the shading a bit more please? It looks rather hard-edged right now and I can't see the transition well. 0:53 Thu Dec 4

Uh, what? I have no idea what you mean, or where I'm supposed to do it? Because I think the stomach area is fine, but could you elaborate? I've had pretty hard-edged shading before, so I'm totally lost.

Like, I have a hard time seeing the "gradient" from dark to light, mostly on the stomach. I know you may think its fine, and you may leave it as-is if you wish. However, I'm pretty much asking for you to define the shading depth, but not where the darkest part of the shading is. I'm sorry I am horrible at explaining things you don't have to listen to me anymore. :S 3:57 Thu Dec 4

Nah, it's cool. I'll take a look and see what I can do. I was just so confused, thanks for explaining.

Re-uploaded. idk I did stuff.

You did exactly what I asked. And You get a CBA because this is so amazing. 21:34 Thu Dec 4

Approved.

Daisy (Alt Q. 3) - Approved
ay papi 04:50, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Should she have a scar on her muzzle? I'm not too sure though... — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded. yes she should. 23:42, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad on the back leg farthest from us. how do you shade? I must know what you use & do because I adore it. 14:51, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the shading is fine, but that's just me. 22:20 Mon Dec 1

all the shading is about the same opacity, so I will have to say it's ok here. smudging man, tons of smudging thats how 00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the shading a little bit on the upper part of the leg closest to us? It's a bit too sharp compared to the rest of the shading 00:24, 12/2/2014

re-uploaded. I thought I already did but apparently not whoops 01:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 0:49 Thu Dec 4

Approved.

Petal (Ro) (Q) - Approved
I had so much fun with this pattern. ^^ Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:17, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading overall? Lol, I wanted her again. The Fox Girl (talk) 03:06, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Shading's fine tbh. 03:43, 11/30/2014

I'd have to say lighten the shading a tad on the > front leg and on the tail only because I can't see the pattern through it. Could be my eyes though, so if you think it's fine ignore me. This is gorgeous <3 12:48, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Try to match the placement of the stripes on the rogue and kit a bit better and lighten them and blur them. Also try to match the coloring of the shading and try to blur it in that same way. I'd really prefer that if I don't get to do this image they match exactly. >.> 13:48 Tue Dec 2 2014

Sorry, that was rude. You wouldn't have known I wanted it you weren't in the chat. But may I please have this image? I did the other two and I'd really like to finish the full set as I'm rather proud of her rogue and kit still. 14:00 Tue Dec 2 2014

Nobody take this the wrong way, I'd just like to say that Jayie shouldn't feel pressured into giving over the image. If Jayie wants to keep the image, you can just send her the file, Breezey, to make it match more precisely. 15:23, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Also, tbh, neither the kit nor the rogue are really showing the pattern on (their) right side, like this one is. The pattern doesn't have to be symmetrical, and besides, I think this matches beautifully. 15:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I didn't realize you wanted this image. But I've also wanted it for quite a while, and I think I can get it to match. I'd like to keep it, if that's alright. I'll reupload soon, I'm having laptop issues. I'm really sorry about the image, but I really enjoyed working on it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:27, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Oh boy so have I, since the nonpreg queens were up for approval. But fine. My comments remain the same the stripes need to be lighter and smudged like the others. As does the shading. 3:44 Wed Dec 3 2014

Sorry, again. I'll hopefully be able to reupload tomorrow, although maybe my roommate will let me borrow her laptop so I can do it tonight. Just out of curiosity, could you send me the file by any chance, so I could get the colors right? If not, that's fine. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:14, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna pop in here and say that Breezey more than likely doesn't have the file. The computer 99% of her files are on isn't in her possession and has probably been crashed a few dozen times. She's told us this a few times, but I don't think you were around to know that- which isn't a bad thing in the least. Hate to say it, Jayie, but you're probably on your own this time. x.x

That's fine. :) I'm cool without the file. I don't think I ever heard that she lost her files, but if I did,sorry for forgetting, and thanks anyway. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:27, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:28, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

As gorgeous as what she was named for. CBA? 21:47, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Approved.