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Branch (HJ) (Ki) - For Approval
dont we all love it when our art programs hate us and our siblings pester us and we need food 23:15, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart, and it also needs to be named in the correct format to File:Branch (HJ).kit.png.

Donee 23:27, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

It only says "Branch.ki.png, are you missing the t? Also, define the earpink a little, I can barely see it. 23:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading as well, and add a bit more depth to it. 05:58, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaddedd  21:34, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading again please. It's still hardly noticeable. (btw I love the design you gave him!) 21:39, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink again as well; I couldn't see it on mobile or laptop very well.

Reuploaded  03:19, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink some more.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:58, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the stripes some? i'm having trouble making them out throught the shading 16:39, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

reeupploaaddeddd  04:15, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 18:07, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Please wait for at least five days before asking for comments. With activity how it is, three days isn't a good enough span of time. That being said, what's going on with the ear pink in <- ear? it looks unsmudged and like it was... idk, kinda sharpened and it seems to have these pixels at the end of the ear that look a bit off?

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't know about the rule change >.< 22:52, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 21:39, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define --> ear pink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:10, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define it some more. Maybe put it above the shading layer.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:34, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Patchfoot (E) ~ For Approval
First elder and black-and-white cat. Who knew shading this would be so hard? - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  14:49, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

White's looking gray. Also, define the shading on the black. 20:03, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

The patches look too over-blurred and define the ear-pink 21:01, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Anywhere where the white looks gray is where there is shading. - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  14:41, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

The patches are still looking overblurred compared to the other images.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:33, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:40, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Mudthorn (Star) - For Approval
Too bad no one cares about him lol. 00:20, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

This is good! However, there's some waste all along the tail.

Nightslash Da Warrior of Shadowclan rar 03:27, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you, but I didn't see any waste? Perhaps I'm not seeing it. 19:15, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Have more shading along the edge of the tail? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 03:41, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reups. Expanded the shading on the tail. 04:43, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just me but the colour of the fur doesn't seem to match the warrior.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:34, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reups ...Yeah...you're right. 15:17, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

blur the earpink some more.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:42, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reups Yup yup. 01:14, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Luna (KP) ~ For Approval
23:01, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Great job on the eye color and pelt markings! I can find no fault/NTI in this! Amazing!TawnyBracken (talk) 02:02, December 27, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Tawny, please only comment critiques about the artwork. You can't just say "nice job" and leave. Anyway, the brown looks too black on the face. Or maybe that's just shading. Either way, can you please lighten it? 02:07, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Tawny 17:30, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job! Is there meant to be earpink on the --> ear? If so, I cannot see it (probably not supposed to O.o) also, the light source of the tail doesn't match the rest of the body.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:36, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups There aren't earpink there 22:11, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front leg?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:43, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Birdwing(Q) ~ For Approval


Pretty! The shading looks paintbrushy (is that a word?)<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:38, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't quite sure what to do so I lightened the shading a few ticks and tried to smooth it out a little though it probably didn't help much

Smoothen out the shading at the top of the shoulder of the <--- leg, where it meets the side of the face. :) 23:29, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The shading on the main body still looks a little paintbrushy.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:44, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Still not sure what paintbrushy means? That's literally as much as I will smooth it out, as I can point out several other approved images with rougher shading in a similar style to this.

Clovertail (E) ~ For Approval
Wait should I put 'For Approval' since my first one got approved? 02:40, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah you can. And, the white isn't supposed to be on the chest at all - only on the legs. Her other images were tweaked for that awhile back, actually. Nice image^^

'''Redone. '''Thanks! 02:59, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 03:19, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

'''Redone. 03:22, December 28, 2016 (UTC)'''

The shadin on the back hip looks (for the lack of a better word) odd...it basically makes the tail look bigger than it really is. If that makes sense. 04:02, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 04:05, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

The shading all around is very blotchy and flat. Maybe add a second layer, and name it something (Appledash never names her layers, but I name all of them myself, usually use something like “shading2” or “depth”) and go over the parts that are darker? Try looking at some other chararts too. --

Redone I added two more layers of shading. And smudged it so it looks like fur. :) 04:26, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the white some more.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:45, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 02:32, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Cloudmist (Lo) ~ For Evaluation
First charart! Hopefully this goes well. The turtorials were really useful. Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job for your first one! Smudge the shading and lighten it a bit though. 04:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded (thank you! :) ) - Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:06, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if you're aware, but her base on the apprentice image is pure white. I can't tell because the brightness on my desktop is lowered right now.

There are some sharp white pixels on the <--- front leg (where it meets the rest of the body) and on the other front leg towards the shoulder. Probably just missing some shading there. :P 19:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded My screen was at max brightness, but lowered it now and managed to find the white spots. It still looks sorta white to me, but I tried to pale the shading to hopefully make it look less gray if it did. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the image, for instance the belly? — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  14:38, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light a bit on the legs and tail. 00:51, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Carpkit (Star) ~ For Approval
All colors from kit image. Comments? 00:38, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading just a tad, particularly on the main body and tail? 00:50, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:57, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (Lo) - For Approval
First loner image. 01:56, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Pricklekit (RC) Star - For Evaluation
02:27, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

He needs to be long-furred, as all RiverClan cats get long fur unless stated otherwise. Also, define the shading. 02:32, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Would I have to restart or is there a way to make it long furred?

Wavepaw (A) - For Approval
she's waving buh-bye to 2016 too 03:11, December 31, 2016 (UTC)