Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 122

Gray Sky Before Dawn (PH) - Redone
OA was Bramble with a redo by Iceheart.

Could you add more or define the mud? 12:14, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

This is really nitpicky, I think (?) but, the stripe are a little dark for a pale grey tabby? Silver tabbies have darker stripes like this, so could you possibly lighten the stripes to be more grey instead of black/dark grey? 16:01, 04/9/2016

Re-uploaded. Millie, Reedtail, and Palefoot both have darker stripes, so I don't see why this image can't. Neither of them are cited with dark gray stripes, yet they have them. So, I'm sorry, but based on the fact that three other sets of images have these kinds of stripes, I don't think I'm required to change them.

Hmm. I forgot about them. Sorry about that Jayce. While I'm here... Can you define the overall shading a few ticks? Especially the tail, front legs, and head. I really love this *-* 20:07, 04/9/2016

Re-uploaded.

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Windstar (Star) ~ Tweaked
i'll like,.... fix this up later when i'm a lot more awake thna i am now 01:56, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

I know you're already going to fix a few things... but could you define the shading basically everywhere? I'm having such a hard time seeing it.

Should she not have more stripes since she is not a pointed tabby? Sorry if this sounds rude or was already pointed out. 12:12, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

ok, then tell me where in the books it says windstar isn't a pointed tabby. or any kind of tabby other than having narrow stripes. 13:10, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded had to alter the source on the front legs too, it didn't make sense as it was. 14:38, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Yes but it doesn't say anywhere that she is a pointed tabbie ether. I just think making her a pointed tabbie is jumping the gun a bit. She is just a thin striped tabbie and she should stay as thins in her description. 18:01, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

i'm allowed to make her any kind of tabby i want as long as the stripes are thin? which hey are? 18:06, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

Ok, I'm cool with that just wanted to check! 18:10, April 9, 2016 (UTC)

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Tigerstar (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match other images. 16:00, 04/9/2016

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Windstar (Q) - Tweaked
Tweaked for thinner stripes, OA was Beebs. 16:44, 04/9/2016

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