Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Cloudpelt (D) - Declined
Tweaked the shading, as it was blotchy. OA was Bramble and a tweak by Leaf-storm. Comments? 07:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:14, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to remove the shading at the base of the tail and put some more on the end? It doesn't really make sense to me. Skt Like a baws  22:41, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded :3 07:13, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his lower back, Looks good! -- 04:16, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base-tail shading, it's darker than the rest. :3 09:11, 06, 06, 2012

Re-uploaded :3 Pretty sure the changes aren't showing,   22:41, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around the flank and base of the tail. 01:01, 07, 06, 2012

The shading doesn't make sense to me. Remove the shading at the base and add it on the tail tip. 02:09, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Berry. But this has been up for a week. This is declined due to the one week limit for tweaks.

Can I take over? 15:53, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

No need to ask, just say, birthday buddy :) 02:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Ki) - tweak
- because the muzzle is darker and looks gray rather than lighter ginger. 00:32, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around his head. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:34, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten his chest, too. 09:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a bit to match the other images? 13:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Should it be blurred more, the stripes will disappear. 14:25, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink on our right a bit. 18:28, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 00:44, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste between the hind paw and the forepaw on our right. :3 02:26, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but no matter how far I tilt my screen, I cannot see it. 02:36, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

She's right, 'Teldy. It's there. I can see it too.

Dappletail (W) - Redone
It was redone because it wasn't an actual dappled tortoiseshell. Comments? 16:27, June 3, 2012 (U

Define the yellow parts more so it matches the elder. 18:11, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the other parts as well, and smudge the patches more to match the elder. 99.111.198.23 18:51, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, that was me. >.<  18:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, and enlarge and blur the earpink~ Skt Like a baws  21:20, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

If you'd like, I can give you a color palette of what I used for the elder. Breeze whisker  00:46, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Breezy, can you? 23:26, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Re-did it. 22:15, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Skt Spoilers... 01:03, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Defined shading. 01:13, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

If this makes sence, try to make the individual patches smaller and more squarish shape/not as long/stretchy. :/ 01:55, 09, 06, 2012

Um...no...it doesn't really make sense. 14:03, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

The patches look over blurred compared to the other images. Can you try sharpening the patches/only smudging them? 14:25, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: This was the best I could get without making it too pixely. 14:33, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (A) - Redone
OA was Wildy, she needed to be actually dappled. I'm sorry Icefrost (I think?), I know this doesn't match the warrior but this was difficult enough as it was to do :S Breeze sent me the direct colors so they're directly off her elder. I wouldn't be surprised if I need to fix a lot of stuff tbh  01:40, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't mind trying to recreate your pattern :p 23:26, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the patterns some more. Skt Like a baws  12:15, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think the patches should be a bit more concentrated, but seeing as this is the opposite side of the cat, that's your choice. Breeze whisker  03:00, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

No offence Breezy, but just for the sake of consistancy, I think the patches should be smudged a bit more. :/ 01:59, 09, 06, 2012

Reuploaded Gah this is such a difficult pattern to work with  05:21, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (w) tweaked
Right, this is my first time tweaking :3 His shading needed to be redone, and I also made his earpink more like his deputy's, hope he looks good! 18:27, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you get rid of the black border? Or is that just how it uploaded.-- 18:34, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and define the ear pink.

Blur the shading too. 21:33, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded defined the shading, and lightened the shading. -- 00:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. 01:20, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lightened the shading. -- 07:14, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it a bit more. C: Skt Spoilers... 01:55, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred it a bit. -- 03:01, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste under the hind legs/tail. 11:50, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see any waste. 21:58, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

I do, but it's //very// small.-- 21:59, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I can see it too. Maybe make the earpink a tad smaller? Skt Spoilers... 03:32, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 05:51, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. W2) - Redone
Just added more dapples to match the manga image better. I suppose it could be considered a redo, but since OA was me it's more of a tweak. Comments? 03:38, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty. The part between her haunch and back, could you blur the dapples/flecks there more? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 04:51, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit. Lovely Scat~ 05:20, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

PALEH!! HOW DARE YOU CALL MY WIFE THAT!!! *KICKS* I think the lineart should match the warrior but I'm not sure. So beautiful <33333 05:28 Thu Jun 7

Haha. *grins at mounty* Yes it should match, and I seem to remember multiple people saying she was shown in the manga where this alt's from as shorthair, so maybe change her to that. 06:16, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

I really hate to say this....but if we're matching that...shouldn't she also be gray instead of ginger and white?

We've done them with colors before. 06:25 Thu Jun 7

Oh, jeez. One of mine. I see, then. You're right. Plus, it looks better like this anyways. xD

Blur the speckles above her haunch. They're sharp compared to the rest of the spots. 12:00, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also, get rid of the torn ear, as she is shone without it in the manga. 18:59, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:35, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Do you think you can center the earpink a bit? 21:57, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:29, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. 21:01, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? 21:08, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And do kittypet kits need a collar...? I can't remember x.x 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

He wasn't a kittypet, he was a rouge or something, he was part of BloodClan as a kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 22:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Unsure on changes. 22:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 22:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Kill ze waste. 22:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the black a tad. 02:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiiiny bit lighter, so the white is lighter. (But then you might have to define the shading on the back. Doesn't make sence. =_=) 07:19, 08, 06, 2012

Re-Ups^ @Dazzy, I'd rather not smudge because it doesn't look smudged on the rogue and loner images. 21:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is kind of flat... Can you define the lightsource? 14:17, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) ~ Tweaked
Cloudy let me have him :3 Just defined the shading (I think that was all I needed to do, correct me if I'm wrong o3o) Comments? 01:04, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his tail and the earpink. 01:08, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading, or thin it out so it doesn't look so dark.

Reuploaded Defined the shading on his tail and the earpink, and lightened up the shading. 14:16, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Briarlight (K) ~ Declined
Made the colour match her other images. Comments? 08:42, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think this was one of the images that didn't need to be tweaked, as it did match the warrior. Anyways, Berry, you //redid// the image, when it only needed to be tweaked... I think this should be declined, as it clearly stated the images were only to be tweaked. The shading doesn't match the other one, and neither does anything else. =.=

First of all, I just recently tweaked this to match the warrior. It matched fine and shouldn't need to be tweaked. Second the color of this is the same as the old image, further proving it had no need to be tweaked. And lastly, nothing matches the old image, it's quite clear you redid this and since you're calling it tweaked, you're lying. And if Maple got her image declined for that, this should be too. Declining unless anyone disagrees. 23:22, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hang on, why is this on the tweak nominations page then. Did someone make a mistake? :/ 02:26, 09, 06, 2012

It doesn't matter why it was on the tweak page. It was redone when it didn't need to be. Plus, the color from the kit already matched the warrior. I think both apprentice images were supposed to be tweaked to match, or something along those lines.

I just checked the archives and it said the kit was ment to be tweaked. :/ But the apprentice has been tweaked, (and it's going the other way round) so this is declined. 04:33, 09, 06, 2012

Daisy (Alt Q) ~ Tweaked
Needed the other lineart. Most recent OA is me. I'm going to redo the shading though, 'cause it irks me greatly.

Re-uploaded. No longer irks me as bad...but... ugh. I prefer darker cats. x.x

Can you blur the belly shading? Skt Spoilers... 02:37, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (Ki) - Redone
You are looking at failure. So hard to draw dem stripes on dis small, cute, little, adorable kit blank! Meh. Redone to match other images. Comments? 04:49, 09, 06, 2012

Define the shading. Nicely done.

Adorable <3 Maybe blur the stripes a Tiny bit, And possibly make his base coat more, cream? Not sure if thats the right word, more like his other images, looks a bit pink to me. -- 06:04, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sunstrike (A) - Tweaked
OA was me and the patches needed to be blurred more to match the warrior (I have my reservations about the warrior looking too overblurred but that's probably just me)  05:36, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Diesel (KP) ~ Tweaked
Bleh :P Had to be light brown... >.< Comments? 20:16, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if it's intentional, but there seems to be a gray stripe on his forehead. 20:22, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Missed that xD Fixed. 23:25, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Wait where did it say he was light brown? The manga's all black and white. 00:01, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

We decided since we make all unknown tabbies brown, we should do that for Diesel too. 02:55, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) - Redone
- Erk this irks me. I'm thinking about redoing it (tomorrow. I have no energy left.) but I'm not sure...should I redo it to match the warrior/elder more, or should I keep it like this? Also please note this isn't the best I could do. My hand is burned and my brain is fried so xD 01:32, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (W) - Tweaked
Needed to be browner; OA of the most recent version was me. 02:28, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) - Tweaked
Just added another layer of shading. Because the ear-pink was under the new shading layer, I redid that too, but with the same color. Comments? 02:34, June 10, 2012 (UTC)