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Medicine Cat Blanks - For Approval
Thanks for all the votes!^^ I removed the whiskers,its easier to work on the blanks without them(will re-add them in the end) 20:16, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add the bridge of the ears onto them? Its the part next to the inside of the ear that has fur on it. You know what i mean right? 20:55, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Not all of the blanks have that, and imo, I don't think it's required. The rogue blanks, loner blanks, StarClan, and Early Settler blanks are prime examples.

Can you lengthen the back legs or shorten the front ones as cats generally have slightly longer back legs?

Well seeing as how the back legs are in the background and i think theres a little perspective going on here, i think theyd look a little smaller than the front ones, but they might need to be expanded a bit longer. Just a smidge. 21:32, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Lengthen the body a little more, and raise it a few pixels; everything from the shoulder back. 21:35, 01/22/2016

This look really nice. :) There's a bit of perspective wonk going on, though, I think. If the cat's torso is facing forward like that, I think the back end should be a /little/ closer to the front end, and the back end should be higher up with the legs longer, if that makes sense, with the stomach smoothed out. Also, thin out all the legs and smooth out the cheeks on the shorthair? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 08:16, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

Can you possibly make them taller to match the other blanks? 08:33, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

The size is fine, Icy. Size doesn't need to match the other blanks, I think.  13:32 Sat Jan 23 

Can you smooth out some pixels on the longhair as well? Some of it doesn't match the shorthair, and idk if it's required or not, but do the pixels need to match? 13:44, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean it doesn't match? I'm a bit confused? Are you talking thickness...? Because the shorthair blanks are probably going to be smoother than the longhair ones... and I think they match well enough, unless what you're saying is going right over my head.

Re.ups Uh,i made it horrible :p I do the longhair tomorrow 21:01, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Curve the rump a little more naturally and bend the front leg thats sticking out a little bit more like the longhair? Could you also make the back leg farthest from us bend a little more naturally too? The "elbow" should be a little bit more concealed since its on an angle, and could you make that same paw a little bit more round and a tad bigger? And also make sure the cheeks match up a tad bit more on the shorthair. 21:52, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Man, a lot of things do happen when I'm away. This looks amazing I would've voted for it myself. Well, anyways, correct me if I'm wrong but, couldn't the cheeks be a bit more connected to the muzzle. I dunno, I'm thinking of realistic looking cats.

The tail on the shorthaired blank has a rather pointy tip, could you perhaps make it more rounded as to make it look more natural..? 15:29, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

reverted Can someone give me a redline pls?I just can't make them lppk right :P 18:24, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

http://www.ezimba.com/work/160126C/ezimba11244531024400.png Here, hope this helps. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:44, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Jayie^^ 21:05, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Make the longfurs a bit fluffier; drop the tummy a few pixels, and fluff the bum/haunch out a bit more. 21:08, 01/26/2016

This looks great. :D Way better than my wonky redline. XD The cheek on the right side of the shorthair's face seems to be sitting a little too low. Raise it up a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:22, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups :D 14:32, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Feel free to ignore me, this may just be me, but the shorthair tail looks just a tiiiny bit too long?  16:43 Wed Jan 27 

This is looking great! ^_^ Can you smooth out the tail and make the paws rounder? The upper part of the right leg on the short-haired also looks a little bit out of place, as it looks as if it's going inward.

Again, I can't explain anatomy well. Basically, fluff that haunch out! Make this fluff a bootylicious babe. Also, try to make the fur on the tail of the longhair more like the tail you had on the very first upload you made; in other words, make the fur smoother, and flow better. I seriously love these *-* 20:02, 01/27/2016

http://www.ezimba.com/work/160128C/ezimba11244580698700.png The neck is way too thick on my redline, not sure how to fix it, but this is what I mean by the cheek being too far down. The round part of the cheek should be right beside the eyes, and by making the cheek higher up, the head seems smaller, so you should make the head a little bigger as well, as I tried to illustrate here. :P And make the ears a little smaller. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:51, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

Pebblepaw (RF) (A) - For Approval
Meh. 01:34 Tue Jan 26

Define the tail shading a bit. I'm no expert at character art, but this is all I think is wrong. It looks lovely. Jaysnow (talk) 01:37, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you^^ 01:52 Tue Jan 26

I'm not saying you need to do anything, or if this even makes sense.. but in the book, it says "her white fur was dusted with brown speckles". Would this mean she'd need more white on her, since it's clearly making white the base? As it stands right now, she kinda looks more brown than white. Unless that's intentional... since the description from the allegiances could be taken either way.

Reuploaded I have yet to actually read the book, so I actually based it on the allegiances, as this is how I wound up interpreting it. I'm going to keep messing around with this, as I am not exactly sure how I want this to look now that I'm aware of this, so I put the white on a separate layer in case I cannot get a decent look to it and need to revert it. o.o 15:53 Tue Jan 26

Fixed the heading. I posted this late at night my time and just now noticed I forgot the rank >.< oops. 17:22 Tue Jan 26

Could you smudge/blur/whatever the haunch shading a bit? It looks rather hard edged. I like what you did with the pattern :)  17:02 Wed Jan 27  17:02, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

^^ Same with the tail shading. 19:51, 01/27/2016

Reuploaded Thanks(: 15:15 Thu Jan 28

Parsleypaw (App) - CBA
I've been on a classic tabby kick lately, so Parsleypaw gets a classic tabby pattern. :P I'm pretty happy with this, though I might tweak the shading and pattern a bit later. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:07, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paws a little? Other than that, it looks terrific, Jayie! Jaysnow (talk) 06:11, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Could you darken him a bit? He is supposed to be a dark brown tabby, and this looks a bit lighter.

Reuploaded. And thanks. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 16:08, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Madric (KP) - CBA
based this one off my old kitten muffin, rip granddad ears 06:46, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

(don't comment on the raggedness I only realised I forgot to add it after I uploaded it) 06:48, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define eye depth. and move --> that eyes pupil one to the left so he doesn't look crosseyed?? I love this *-* <span style="">13:25, 01/26/2016

Yay granddad ear cat. Could you define the facial shading and eye depth a tiny bit?

reuploaded 20:32, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Cloudpaw (RF) (A) - For Approval
Let's play a game called "guess Jayce's favorite prefix". Is it obvious enough? 8D

Darken the shading a little bit? <span style="">18:50 Wed Jan 27

Re-uploaded.

Shade that small white spot below the left back leg.

Re-uploaded.

There's a little bit of white leaking onto the lineart of the same leg.

Re-uploaded. Tinkered with something, but it's impossible for there to be leaking white onto the lineart- that's my topmost layer, barring the layer that has the eye color. o.O Everything also has a clipping mask, so it's not leaking...

Yes there is. 03:22, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

No, there's not. I checked for waste in three or four different ways when I reuploaded, and I cannot see anything.

Duskpaw (A) - CBA
Comments? 16:08, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Could you desaturate the whole image? <span style="">16:14 Tue Jan 26

Also define the shading pretty much everywhere; I'm having problems seeing it.

Reuploaded. 16:21, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

There's black waste in their eyes. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  18:10, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

No,there's not; the eye layer is above all the others, so it would cover up anything else. Also, the only black on the image is the lineart. It's probably just the coloration of the eye. 18:21, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Well it seems as though the pupils are too big— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 18:30, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

The pupils are the same as on the other apprentice images. 18:32, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

How come the bottom half of the eyes are super dark? Could you maybe blur the eyes a little so it's a bit less jarring? <span style="">19:23 Tue Jan 26

That's what I was just gonna say.. the pupils are the proper size for this blank, but the vast color change is what's making it look like they're different.

Reuploaded. 20:15, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Hawkpaw (SC) (A) ~ For Approval
so comments? I know the ear pink looks a little bad. 16:42, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, as I can't see any at all.

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:58, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

The shading still really needs to be darkened. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:00, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the ear pink 17:36, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

I see some waste. 18:47, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes more yellow? They look amber to me, but feel free to disregard this if they're not.

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 14:52, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the shading needs to be darkened a lot more, I can't see it at all. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:11, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

This is going to sound really annoying, but I really cannot see the shading well, and in the areas where I can, it is very hard-edged. I have looked on multiple screens, and consistently cannot clearly see the shading. Darken the shading a lot and blur/smudge/whatever it. I'm sorry if this came off as rude, that was not my intention at all. <span style="">18:48 Wed Jan 27

Can I suggest you lighten the base slightly it will help the shading stand out. 22:14, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps that's as light as I can go or it''ll look like a regular gray.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 18:15, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

Blossompaw (SC) (A) - Declined
i think the shading needs lightened but I will fix it later. Also I need to rename it my bad. 16:43, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-named. Also, does this have stripes, or is that texture? I can't tell. Since she's ginger-and-white, she needs stripes. (some people have texture that looks like stripes, and stripes that look like texture, I apologize for asking)

Re-upload added the stripes 17:15, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Do you think you could add more stripes?  <span style="">20:20 Tue Jan 26 

What do you mean? Should I add more ginger and add stripes to it or should I just add more stripes to what is there? 20:54, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Okay, so I greatly apologize for this message and realize I probably should just let it go, but I'm just a little confused. Shouldn't this be my image? I reserved this image here, while Velvet didn't reserve it until over eight hours later. I've had a long day, so I might just be mistaken or something, so I'm sorry for posting this if it is in fact Velvet's image. 21:41, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Nice eye! Sorry, Velvet, but Icebreeze is correct. (sorry for not noticing it beforehand, actually) The image is in fact hers to create and post. =(

Sorry guys, urgh I hate time difference ok but can I just add the characters needing art needs to be updated then with the new characters. I wouldn't have made this error if I didn't have to jump about looking for art to do. I know people will argue that it is easy to look at what characters have art needing done and then check on the reservation board but it's not if your living a hectic life. Sorry if this sounds like a rant I can't wait to see what you do with this art Icebreeze 22:13, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Oh and btw Velvet, just letting you know that Rileypaw does not have a kittypet image, before you make another error. You reserved a KP image when all they were was a kit, loner, and apprentice 00:49, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry I ment to write kit it was late and I think I just copied the one above but this needs to be clearer. Not everyone is able to go looking around for the correct answers. We need a constantly updated charters with no-art list. 07:29, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

The book was just released, please calm down. It will get done when we have time.

Rileypaw (A) ~ For Approval
I did a thing. And it is glorious. 01:21, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the dark gray stripes around his legs, maybe? This is great. Jaysnow (talk) 01:22, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

There wouldn't be much shading there to begin with, since the lightsource is shining on his legs closest to us. Could I possibly get a second opinion? 02:13, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Good point.... Jaysnow (talk) 02:15, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the stomach and chest shading a bit, and define it everywhere else....if there is any. I honestly can't tell.

reups I defined it on the legs but since my light source is shining from nearly directly onto them, I'd like not to define it any more 13:30, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest and belly some?  <span style="">13:56 Wed Jan 27 

Define the shading a little more on the very bottom of the belly? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

He does have a paler belly, is that what you're seeing? If not, what exactly do you mean? 15:10, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Also if i lighten it any more ill be told to define the shading depth everywhere else again since theyre on the same layer. Ill get to it when i get home. 18:18, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

at least one of his ears should be dark grey. 19:04, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

Rileypaw (Kit) - For Approval
Right let's try this again... I will make him short haired and add a coller if need. 16:59, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base coat, as well as thin out the stripes and add more? You have to match Snowdapple's apprentice image, I don't know if you've seen.  <span style="">17:05 Wed Jan 27 

darken the tail shading as well I can barely see it— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 17:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Youll need to add a collar since he was a kittypet. Also do you need my file? 18:16, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Does he need a collar? I am having trouble putting a collar on a long haired blank. 18:37, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

You can borrow the collar lineart from Stormcloud's kit image if you like. I can send you an image with just the lineart if you want.  <span style="">18:42 Wed Jan 27 

Also technically wouldnt you need to wait until blossompaw was archived before posting this? 19:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think they would, since it was mistakenly reserved/posted, and the other artist came forward to claim it? Not sure in this situation though. Sorry I don't have anything constructive to say on the art, but it's all been said. <span style="">19:17, 01/27/2016

That would be great Shinx and actually Snowdapple would it be possible for me to get that file. I want to re do him 20:10, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hope this helps :)  <span style="">20:21 Wed Jan 27 

Reupload fixed collar and stripes. 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the base to match the apprentice? <span style="">21:13, 01/27/2016

Um it's the same I colour picked? 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

It looks much darker. Either define the light, or make sure you didn't colorpick from a shaded part. Define the shading depth too.  <span style="">21:42 Wed Jan 27 

Reupload defined shading and lightened 21:51, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hey shinx could you do me a flavor and give velvet the file? Im out of town rn 22:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Sure thing buddy- Velvet, do you have an e-mail or something I can send it to?  <span style="">22:20 Wed Jan 27 

Yeah sure it's Leia.clark@gmail.com 22:21, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened base 23:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Blossom (Lo) - For Approval
I love her design <span style="">19:11, 01/27/2016

Rileypaw (Lo) ~ For Approval
I got the file for the apprentice, so the colors should match  <span style="">19:48 Wed Jan 27 

Same as apprentice; at least one of his ears should be dark gray.

Patch (RF) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Dilute tortie! <span style="">16:45 Thu Jan 28

Do you think you could make the orange a little bit oranger? I know it's supposed to be pale, but right now I'm having trouble telling it's supposed to be orange at all.  <span style="">17:10 Thu Jan 28 

Could I get a second opinion on that? I think it looks pretty orange myself. <span style="">18:08 Thu Jan 28

A second opinion has arrived, and I think it looks pale brown, not orange... although, this is still really pretty no matter what you choose to do with the coloring; nicely done!

Also he needs a collar but apart from that he's lovely 19:19, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

Bellapaw (A) ~ For Approval
thanks to Shinx for uploading for me. i have not done a single Warriors Wikia Character Art in months so please, bear with me <span style="">17:08 Thu Jan 28

>sees 'Bella' >assumes the cat will look like Berry's adorable kitty

Can you define the shading a bit? I'm having trouble seeing it.