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Shattered Ice (Warrior) ~ For Approval
Heyyy :D Missed you all so much <3 Alrighty, so it's my first image back so don't go too rough on me..if you hate the tinted shading let me know. But black shading didn't make it look good at all. The pattern is a real pattern, but if you hate that let me know. Not bad for my first one in a while. :) Comment away!  18:33, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

The gray and white dosen't quite match the rogue image, and he needs to be long haired. 18:35, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Whoops sorry, my bad. Didn't know there was a rogue image. I'll redo it. 18:38, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It actually went pretty smoothly on the body. The tail was my troublemaker..I know it doesn't look too good, but I tried..any suggestions on the tail pattern? x.x Lemme know if there's any shading probs. 16:13, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any gray near the front legs (looking at the rogue a bit more anyways), and expand the white chest area a little bit too.

Tbh, I think those areas are fine. Because if you look at the rogue's front leg closely, the gray is going down the leg a bit, like over the muscle. And the gray went over the chest exactly as this is, because the rogue is almost exactly like the warrior blank, only difference is the rogue sat down and raised his head up. That's how I looked at it and based my design. But of course, if someone else agrees with you, I'll change it. :3 Just stating my opinion. 16:39, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Skye - there shouldn't be as much gray, since there's some spots with gray that the rogue doesn't have. 16:44, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, not on the front legs? Forelegs are front, not back. There is no gray on that chest area leading down to the legs, while you have some here. The white chest is also fairly larger on the rogue, while with this, I can't even tell he has one. There shouldn't be any gray there at all, since the rogue and warrior are facing the same direction. The gray area should be the belly area, not the chest, which on the rogue and warrior blanks, are two different things. The belly is the area between the legs on this blank, while on the rogue, there's more room, and you can tell where the belly is. With these blanks, that area is quite a bit smaller. As you have it, it does not quite match, and since they're facing the same direction, the placement should match as well. If it was the opposite side, you'd have more room to "play", so to say, but with this, you don't.

Gosh no need to be rude. I was just stating an opinion and asking for a gentle comment. I'll fix it later. .-. 16:59, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

I wasn't being rude. I was explaining my critique in further detail. I fail to see exactly how I was being rude, when all I was doing was elaborating on my apparent rejected comment. When you post art, this should be expected. I was providing you with a legitimate comment, and telling you to move something, remove something, expand something, ect, isn't rude. Rude would be lying to you and telling you this doesn't match at all- which it does pretty much match, actually, except for that patch of gray, which I asked you to fix....and also define the light on both front legs too, please. ^^

Define your tail light. And Snow is right; they wasn't being rude, but purely honest. 17:38, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry...It's just I've been through a lot of crap recently and cats have just been being mean to me so when you use italics and bolds it just comes off the wrong way at first. I read it over a few times just now and realized you didn't mean it to be in a rude way. So I'm sorry for overreacting. -Back to the image, I removed the gray from the white underbelly and from above the foreleg. Added a few highlights on the legs and tail to help show where that light is at..sorry again Cloudy. 22:06, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Looking good (he looks very fluffy :3)! Can you just darken the shading, especially on the tail?

Reuploaded. Haha, thank you Stoney! :3 22:36, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading going down the spine and on the back leg. Brick 18:44, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't blur it too much for I think I'd be told to define it again. 19:37, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey I don't mean to rush but I have to get this approved by Friday because I'm going to AZ for 9 days. No computer is accessible. So please comment so we can get this approved fast?? Thank you!! :) 19:13, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

The white on the back legs look really gray, and I believe there would be at least a little bit of light on them. Also define the shading on the gray. Please don't ask for comments after only a day. If it's been like three, that's one thing. One is rushing it and makes you appear really impatient.

Re-uploaded. I'm sorry, I've been told that more than once. But I do really need this approved by Friday..or I don't know what I'll do. 22:36, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

I realize this, but that doesn't mean we can twist things because of others going on vacation. People are busy and have lives. Also, shift the placement of the white a bit on the face. The white on the rogue goes a bit farther up, and is a bit thinner on the muzzle. This kinda shows exactly where I'm talking about. There's also flecks of faded lineart throughout the image, especially on the tail.

Re-uploaded. Is that better? And in case uploads are not working again... 17:36, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry to interrupt, but could you define the shading just a little bit? 12:25, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''It's alright, Beebs. May someone now redo the CBA? Also thanks Cloudy for doing that. You da best. <3 12:36, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading on the backleg and tail? This is really good. =) ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:48, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! But I'd prefer not to define it more because I'd be told to define the light again. It's hard with a cat like this because that leg is white, so it'd have to be a gray shading like that or else the leg would look dark gray. And the tail shading is already pretty dark so I would rather not define it more but if someone else agrees I'll do it. Sorry if it looks like I'm shooting down your comment. I'm not. ;) 15:24, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

You can use black/darker shading. Why do people think you can't use black on white cats??? Anyways, I agree with Breezeheart. I can't see the shading at all on that back leg.

Re-uploaded. I always use black shading on white. :/ sorry I thought you were talking about the back leg closest to us. I added more shading to the farthest back leg. Also my dad brought his laptop so I was able to edit it ^.^ And [http://www.ezimba.com/work/140827C/ezimba14858134621400.png in case changes are not showing.. ] 17:50, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Is there meant to be white patches on the tail? I can't really tell, so if there is, can you whiten them a bit? 20:54, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Um there are supposed to be...I can try but I remember when making the tail--which took almost three hours do to the stubborn fact I'm a perfectionist--I tried about a thousand times but when I re-whitened them and then did the shading, the shading always darkened them down the the color they are now. So yeah I'd rather not but if someone agrees like I said I can try. I can also provide like two images uploaded to ezimba and you guys can see which one looks better. Whitened or how it is now. 22:03, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

It's easy, just lighten the opacity of the shading on the tail until they look more white. 20:09, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Alrighty, I'll reupload it tomorrow when I have my computer back. ;) 01:55, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gahhhhhh hope that helped a bit. Also fixed a few other things.. Omg that tail is a pain in da ass X3 20:52, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Littlebird (Star) - For Approval
probably my first tabby I ever did that I actually liked. colors are pulled off of the original file. comments? 19:24, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna take a guess that you smudged the shading? If you did, thin the smudges out a little bit, and if you didn't, blur the shading/smooth it out. Also her elder looks kinda shiny so I suggest maybe fixing that sooner or later since that shading makes this look different in terms of color.

Add depth to the shading. This is gorgeous. 20:27 Sun Aug 17

Oh myyyyy, this is beautiful! Define the face shading a tad? ~ Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  22:17, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded thanks dudes! 02:38, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Ducky! :D Define the earpink a little more..it seems to disappear with the fur colors. Also blur the smudged shading some more. 17:46, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 18:04, August 23, 2014 (UTC)

I think the smudges on the shading are a little too thick.

Re-uploaded' 02:49, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the smudged shading some more. Especially around the chest and on the body, and on <--- this paw/leg. It seems a bit thick still and can't really see the stripes through it. Also, the earpink seems to disappear in <--- this ear. The shading is a little too dark there for such pale pink. Also, we could be seeing an old image. May you provide a link to a photo viewer like ezimba or whatever, just in case changes might not be showing? 13:42, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded redid that shadin 16:33, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the leg shading? 22:46, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Duskfur (Queen) ~ For Approval
Since Snow withdrew this, i gave it a shot since she needed a Queen image. I tried to match the stripes the best i could. Colorpicked from her Warrior image, i used a redish tint for the shading. Also, that stripe on the tail is part of the dorsal stripe. Comments? ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  00:58, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Her dorsal stripe should be sorta more to the left on her tail, and same with the back because of the perspective. Brick 10:20, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the pale part on her tail, and I'm also agreeing with Brick. ^^

'''Re-uploaded. '''I just decided to redo the stripes. Moved dorsal stripe to the left, and made pale parts look more visible. Is that better? ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  02:04, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

I still can't see the pale part of the tail, what color did you use? 7:05 PM, Wed Aug 20, 2014

I color picked it from her warrior image. Its the shading making it not visible; if i make it even more defined, you wont be able to see the shading. =/-- ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  19:30, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe swith around the light source? I'm assuming you're using a lightsource coming from the top right, so mayve try bottom left so -> of her head would be in shadow? 7:33 PM, Wed Aug 20, 2014

I think switching the source would be a good idea for this image. Give it a shot and see what happens.

Re-uploaded. Switched the light source; Ive never used this angle as the light source before, so i tried to make it look the best i could. Is that better? =)-- ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  05:53, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Hm would you smudge the underbelly fur into the rest of the fur just a little, not too much, but just so it'd blend and look a little more natural? Very pretty! :) 11:51, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, since on her other image, it looks like the OA blurred it instead of smudging, but i will if someone else agrees.-- ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  04:35, August 22, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge it. It'll look a bit more furry that way. 4:58 PM, Sat Aug 23, 2014

Re-uploaded. Smudged pale parts, and also lightened the fur a bit to match her other images. Better?-- ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  03:31, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Add some shading on the belly? It looks kinda flat.. 13:39, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

There is no shading on the belly. I was told to switch the lightsource so the pale parts were more visible. So I would rather not, unless someone else agrees.-- ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  20:29, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe add a small curve so the light looks like it's coming from behind? To me, it looks fine, this is only a suggestion. 9:34 PM, Sun Aug 24, 2014

Re-uploaded. Added small curve of shading. Better?--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  00:26, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and give it more shape. Nutmeg (the one below this section) appears to have the same basic source (if I'm seeing Jayie's shading correctly), so perhaps you could try that? This appears to be one giant dark line along her back.

Re-uploaded. I just decided to redo the stripes and shading. I tried my best to make the stripes resemble her Warrior image more by moving them closer together, and i moved her dorsal stripe so that it was more in the center of her back/tail. I used a red tint this time; so you should be able to see through it now. Is that better? =/--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:51, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Smear the fur into her ears a bit. 20:53, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:19, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Try darkening the stripes some. 15:43, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened stripes.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  15:50, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Crowfrost (D) - For Approval
#Crowfrostforleader2015 Brick  07:36, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

this has to match his warrior image. 09:46, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

It looks like the white parts are blurred on his Warrior image.. it looks like you smudged it here; so to make it match, maybe blur them instead? Also, the white on the tail looks really gray.<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:55, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/15e9tuf.png, oops! I didn't know he had a Warrior Image. When I made the image, there was no warrior image on his page, so I thought he didn't have one. My mistake -w-' Brick  14:57, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'd think some of the white on his one paw (back front paw lol) would show up on this blank.

Define the light on his legs 15:54, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on his tail too. You might also want to think about lightening the shading on the white part of the tail by just using the eraser tool with a lower opacity. 01:37, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/2eposnr.png The wiki still isn't showing changes, so you'll have to go on the link to see the changes. :/ Brick  15:13, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

His warrior charart has green eyes. <span style="">9:38 PM, Thu Aug 28, 2014

They are green on this one. <span style="">2:00 Fri Aug 29

Dull the haunch highlight and darken him just a touch. Also brighten the ear pink, and please crop the image. There's too much extra space.

The tail white seems a bit gray 20:07, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Idk he still looks like he's blue eyed zooming in on the image itself. ;-; <span style="">8:23 PM, Fri Aug 29, 2014

I'll reupload tomorrow as it's quite late over here, but I just wanted to say. Please stop commenting on the tail white because, he doesn't have tail white. The image shown on the wikia right now, is what I made before I saw he had a warrior image. Like I said, please please please check the Tinypic links, because the wikia rarely accepts my re-ups, so please just check the links before you comment. Brick  21:31, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Okay then jeez. <span style="">7:20 PM, Sat Aug 30, 2014

Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/2ronz28.png, The wiki still isn't showing the version done from the warrior's image pattern, so please remember to check the tinypic link. I didn't crop the image, because I saved the blank directly, so it shouldn't need to be cropeed. plus, there wasn't actually much for me to crop. Brick  19:57, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

There's way too much extra space to the left of the charart. I know you saved the blank directly, but they still have loads of extra space. Please crop the image so there's no extra space to the left to the lineart- there's no need to keep all the extra space.

Re-ups, http://i59.tinypic.com/2i12sso.png Brick   09:17, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Stormcloud (KP) ~ For Approval
Is it possible for me to get the whole set later? I already have the others finished, I just need this approved. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:52, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his hip a bit, and define the earpink, it's hard to see. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:07, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

For the hundrenth time, my shading is always smudged . AKA no, I won't blur it. Re-upped for earpink tho. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  23:02, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you smudge the shading some more? <span style="">23:31 Tue Aug 26 23:31, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Tbh, I can't tell it's smudged, and I would have made the same mistake Jayie did. Don't get snippy- it's honestly hard to see that it's smudged shading. Also, what's up with the tail stripes? I can't tell they're there because of the shading.

..Did I come across as rude? I'm sorry, that wasn't my intention V_V Anyway, the tail stripes are rings. Should I make them more visible? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  00:03, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Could you please, Shinx? That would be lovely. ^.^

Lighten the ear pink a bit, or at least make it more visible. Also, he kind of looks blind with the eyes so dull like that...perhaps lighten them up or sumtin'.... 01:34, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth while you're lightening his eyes. Also, even though the shading is smudged it still looks way too dark and awkward on this cat so if you would please blur it down some that'd be nice. You'll see if you go up and look at Littlebird, me and Cloudy(Jayce) I'm old lol were telling Ducksplash the same thing. 14:32, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm sorry, but no, I won't blur it. I tried just now, it makes it look strange to me. I can lighten it if you want, or change to blurred shading (which I'd rather not do if I don't have to), or put a layer of blurred shading on top, but I can't blur the shading that's already smudged. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  14:49, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, why not try both methods that you just suggested, and upload them to tinypic or something, and let me see what each version looks like?

http://i60.tinypic.com/qn5mo0.png http://i60.tinypic.com/15heo3m.png Here ya go. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  22:28, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

I like the first link better personally. 00:10, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

That's the blurred shading, and again, I REALLY don't want to switch to it if I don't have to. If more then one person tells me to, I guess I can do it, but I don't like using blurred shading much. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:58, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think if you just smudge it more itll turn out right. 10:00, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped Smudged the shading more, and added a bit of texture. I can remove it if you want. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:00, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is very odd please expand it, blur it, and then define it to soften it. (protip: you can both smudge and blur shading wow) <span style="">21:29 Fri Aug 29 2014

I'll go define it and stuff, but as I said before (read up a bit), I've tried blurring it, it looks strange. o_o <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:36, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Then try a different tint, or even black, if you're not using it. Still trying to figure out what people have against using black shading; I like it. Changing what you're shading with can have amazing results.

Reups Redid the shading. It was black to begin with. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:28, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Since we don't have a specific shade of gray for him, would you mind making him a more neutral shade of gray? You don't have to go much darker, but perhaps try between #C1C1C1 and #A1A1A1?

Re-upped 16:06, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

O'Hara (KP) ~ CBA
ye 05:13, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define and darken collar shading plz. I can't believe you used that color for a collar, you loser.

Define the shading all over. so beautiful imma steal it =3 14:39, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded. I think the rest of the shading is fine. 23:59, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Can youd efine the shading some more? 02:39, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded there is such a thing as not super dark shading but whatever 02:56, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the ear pink just a little bit more? If you don't want to, that's cool with me.

Okay, he has to be male since I'm an idiot and misread the description.

re-uploaded 00:03, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 00:06, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Dapplenose (Star) ~ For Approval
I luv StarClan blanks :3

Btw this is my first mottled kitty SziriXxX (talk) 11:17, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws and tail. Beautiful job! <span style="">3:28 PM, Thu Aug 28, 2014

re-ups Thank you :3 SziriXxX (talk) 18:33, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading some. This is pretty :3 20:04, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

re-ups :3 SziriXxX (talk) 21:15, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading a bit? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  17:40, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 20:14, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the chest shading. This is looking really pretty ^^

re-ups Thanks^^ SziriXxX (talk) 11:46, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Scarlet (KP) - For Approval
meh kitteh c: 03:57, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Purrty c: 06:20, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

You wouldn't mind shrinking the shoulder high light a bit? its a bit too big right now. <span style="">21:23 Fri Aug 29 2014

Re-uploaded 02:09, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit more? Yay, Scarly got Scarlet after all ^^

Re-uploaded I wanted her to be a bit more… scarlety… changes 03:22, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Grasspaw (A) ~ For Approval
Another pale brown tabby. :3 Added a thin texture.

Add some light to the far back paw, and possibly the back? I think there would probably be some light there with your source. (If you don't use highlights, ignore me.)) <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:24, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Added some highlights on the paw and a bit on the end of her back.

Can you define the ear pink on > side just a bit? 19:54, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make her look a bit less green-ish. Tinting your shading brown/red might work. Also, for pale brown cats, I tend to use #9c6442 as a nice pale brown shade, but that's totally up to you if you want to do that. 01:58, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Defined the ear pink by removing a little bit of the shading, and made the shading brownish. :3

Victor (KP) ~ For Approval
I've always wanted to design my own tabby =). Anyways, Heres Victor. Used a red tint for the shading, etc. Comments?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  15:30, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back, it looks like a dark strip just down the back. This beautiful, dear. <3 <span style="">16:19 Fri Aug 29

Re-uploaded. Blurred the back shading, and also added another layer of shading along the edges to give it more depth. Thank you =)--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  16:49, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Next time, please wait until your image is archived before posting a new one. The rule is your image is yours until it's archived. If you try to post another image without waiting until the other one is archived, I will be declining it on sight.

Define the shading on her leg and blur the back shading a bit; I love them stripes 20:05, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred back shading and defined shading on the leg. I cant blur it anymore, or else it will start not being visible.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:34, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

The spinal stripe for the tabby and the shading blend into one another. You could use a different tint, different light source, or even the pelt colors. 21:42, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed light source. If changes arent showing up: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=unh95&s=8#.VAM8rtddVKY --<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  15:18, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

And now he appears green-ish, or that's my weirdo monitor. Pale/light brown isn't an easy color to work with. What color is your base pelt and your stripe layer?

He doesnt look green-ish on my screen. I used a pale brown (Not sure of the exact color code, sorry), and all i did was set the tabby layer on multiply above the original pelt color layer. I used a dark red tint for the shading, and pure white for the highlights. so i didnt use any green whatsoever.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  18:37, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, why not try tweaking that stripe color a bit, to perhaps a darker brown, and then set it on multiply, and lower the opacity if you have to? Sometimes, using the base pelt for stripes on multiply doesn't give the intended results- I would know, I've tried. I think these could be darkened a bit, and it wouldn't hurt to darken that stripe color. And brown can come out green no matter what colors you're using, lmao. Brown's an iffy color to work with sometimes. Also, that one foot on <-- side of the image has no shading, and it probably should have some. =P

I think it looks greenish as well. Try using #9c6442 for a pale brown that isn't green-ish - it's the same one used on Clovertail. 18:40, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Also, while you're at it, please crop the image to the lineart. The extra space on these blanks and a couple others really isn't necessary. Could you also give a bit more depth to those eyes?

Re-uploaded. Ill crop it on the next upload. Does this look better? http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=iel1fl&s=8#.VAPAZdddVKY--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  00:42, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Yup, but did you give depth to the eyes like I asked? They appear the same on both versions.

Re-uploaded. Added depth to the eyes. Is that better? =) If changes arent showing: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=20arjup&s=8#.VAPeYdddVKY -- 02:50, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, again. Forgot to crop it. ^^'-- 02:52, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Dustpelt (Star) - For Approval
I've always had a soft spot for him, so I grabbed him up. Comments? — <font color= black face="courier new">☣ <font color= black face="courier new">D <font color= black face="courier new">iablo  <font color= black face="courier new">You must be <font color= black face="courier new">Mr. Boggins! <span style="">Sat Aug 30 06:51

Thicken a couple of the stripes by a pixel or two, like they are on the app and warrior. I'm so happy he gets to be with Ferncloud again ;-;

reups same here dude — <span style="">Mon Sep 1 05:42

Icecloud (Star) ~ For Approval
why Erins why?? rest in peace, my dear. 19:23, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. 19:24, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Can you also blur the paw shading? 20:27, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 01:28, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

If you're using the source I think you are, there wouldn't be any shading on the arm to the right of the lineart seen here. Also, brighten up the white on --> leg and perhaps add a chest highlight if you're comfortable doing that. Yeah, really, why did they kill her?

Reups like this? 23:04, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot the chest highlight. I'll have it up soon. 08:55, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Reups there we go; changes 11:52, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Ziggy (KP) ~ CBA
thank you Skye for the confirmation. Also, yes you can make your cat odd-eyed if they're not given an eye color, but please don't overdo it. in this case it was done to fit the name. Comments? *walks away* 19:25, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the top of the head shading-wise just a bit, and even possibly the tail. Otherwise, it looks great. 21:26, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 21:31, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a bit on the belly, face, and front visible leg. Also, might you shade the tag on his collar? It doesn't look like it has any, and I think there would be, to give it some depth.

re-up 20:41, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Crop the image to the lineart and upload the changes to iaza or whatever it's called so the rest of us can see it.

re-up changes be here 20:51, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 00:11, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Blackstar (Star) - For Approval
-many tears shed- Comments? -Feather 20:11, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Update- removed some waste. -Feather 20:19, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is really awesome, love it, although could you give more shape to the chest and the back? 21:28, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink a bit more. Also, can you define the chest and tail shading a bit? oh my starclan my little baby died ;-;    Brick  21:52, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

His paws aren't that smudged on his other images.

Re-uploaded.

Doesn't he need scars and patchy fur?It never said that he "repaired" when he went to Starclan. SziriXxX (talk) 14:44, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

It states here that StarClan cats recover from their wounds.

Oh,i didn't noticed that :) SziriXxX (talk) 15:24, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't he still have a patchy pelt though? Patchy fur isn't necessarily a wound, and I haven't seen any confirmation that cats go to StarClan in their best appearance, just with healed wounds. Brick 09:22, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

I have no problem adding patchy fur in, but I honestly think StarClan cats would be rid of it. 09:47, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

It appears that he hasn't had the patchy fur all of his life, so I think it's fine. <span style="">1:26 PM, Mon Sep 1, 2014

It's considered a "wound", or something detrimental to the character, and most patchy fur is caused by fighting. I say it's fine as it is.

Define tail and facial shading (and belly unless it's intentional.) <span style="">10:51 PM, Mon Sep 1, 2014

Jessy (KP) ~ For Approval
Alright, I'm not sure how satisfied I am with this, but...comments? 21:17, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and define the light on the tail 01:30, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:43, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps make the eyes brighter? They seem rather dull.

Re-uploaded Decided to redo the eyes entirely. 23:07, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

The pupils look slightly... derped. They look like their going off slightly in different directions. Brick 13:58, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

They look fine to me, but if someone else agrees with you, I'll change them. 14:02, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe just move one pupil one pixel over. <span style="">14:14 Mon Sep 1

Please don't use "derp" like that, Trunktail. Some could consider that offensive, and offending people is the last thing we aim to do. Using "cross-eyed" or another term like that, is preferred.

Re-uploaded. Changed the style around completely- hopefully this looks better. 21:05, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

define the head shading a tad? 00:07, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Lilyheart (W) ~ For Approval
Does anyone else think that Lilyheart is the cutest name ever? <span style="">21:34 Sat Aug 30

Changes. <span style="">21:37 Sat Aug 30

Oatpaw (WC) (App) - For Approval
So freaking happy with this. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:56, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

define and blur the shading a little. 00:10, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Morningflower (Q) ~ For Approval
This should keep me busy for some time. Comments? 01:34, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Looking at the other images, I think the lighter parts should be a bit smaller, and the markings blurred more, but other than that it looks really good. :) I really like the shading. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:01, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Which lighter parts are you talking about? The white or the pale markings? 03:04, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

The pale markings, sorry. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:05, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 14:23, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the markings more. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:34, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 17:38, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (Q) - For Approval
Since I didn't realize that Lilystem's alt wasn't relevant anyore and it got declined, I decided to do Ivytail instead. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:45, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Can you make the brown on her back a tad darker to match the other images? 15:15, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

The white looks really gray on the tail, and it looks like it could be blurred just a tad bit more. Nice job =)<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  15:16, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The Wiki's being a pain and won't show the updates, so here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140901C/ezimba13931847181500.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 18:52, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Webster (KP) - For Approval
Please do not ask me to lighten the black. Seeing all the lineart is not mandatory, and I think lightening this anymore than it already is would ruin my pattern. You can clearly see the lineart in some places. =P

Actually, I think a bit of the white could stand to be lightened. Not all of it, not where there's shading, but a bit on the face mostly, especially on the muzzle. It looks good. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:55, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love this pattern.

Expand the ear-pink a touch and blur it, and maybe smudge the bit of white by the belly ( tim-tum  )  23:06, August 31, 2014 (UTC)
 * not sure whether is slightly scared or just in awe…

Re-uploaded. <laughs at Scar> You're a dork.

Spikepaw (A) ~ For Approval
I'm on a roll. First time I've been happy with texture. Comments? 21:15, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Perchpaw (A) ~ For Approval
As one is completed, another steps up. I took what I learned from Harespring's deputy and swirled the patches, but that can be removed and simply blurred instead. Also, the odd eyes, yes, it was intentional, if someone asks me to remove them like a SW then I will I couldn't figure out what color to do, I may go with green or amber if I'm asked to choose one color. <span style="">10:49 PM, Mon Sep 1, 2014

It's perfectly fine, as long as it's not overdone. Anyways, try switching your reserve - it should be September 1st, not August 25th. I'll let it slide so you'll change it this time, but next time, it'll get auto-declined. 22:51, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

smacks head D'oh! I thought I was forgetting something... thanks Beebly <span style="">10:57 PM, Mon Sep 1, 2014

As for actual critique, try smudging the patches more, and the white is looking gray here. 23:00, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

reup I may just re-do the patches, I thought that they would look a bit better... <span style="">11:31 PM, Mon Sep 1, 2014

changes here if wikia = derp <span style="">11:32 PM, Mon Sep 1, 2014