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Whitethroat (RO) - Declined
This is my first charart, so please don't leave rude comments for it.

Blackstar, A white cat with jet-black paws....... 02:06, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

The image is too small. I see no shading, there is a strange white line around it.-- Night s h i n e   R  02:35, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I will enlarge it and make all the white lines black. Blackstar - A white cat with jet-black paws....... 03:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Lightpelt has already reserved Whitethroat's rogue image. Please be sure to check before reserving a charart Night  Fall 04:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) - Declined
Well, here he is! Open for comments now. Butterfly } { Song!  13:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The image is a redlink at present. ✐Sa NdY  13:48, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I KNOW. I can't open the file! I'll try again. Please wait Butterfly }  { Song!  14:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Butterfly } { Song!  14:29, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  14:49, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

In the future, don't use caps, because it's like shouting. I do see the eye color, just that the highlight in the eye seems a bit big. Also, blur the stripes and shading on the tail. -- 雨 晶須  15:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Needs eye colour! :3 Dawnleaf 14:45, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

The eye color is there, but whoever made these blanks made the highlights just as big as the eye color space. And I'm sorry, I won't use caps in the future. Butterfly } { Song!  19:05, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think he had the nick in his ear when he was an apprentice. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:22, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, he might've. Thistleclaw was a pretty tough mentor.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:29, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

As for the image, you should use a tutorial or an apprentice pic like Frostfur's for the eyes.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:26, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I still think this is good for my third attempt (I think of it as my first because it's the only one that was up for more than one day). I origionally made him with the scars on his muzzle, but painted over them because he got them later. Butterfly } { Song!  01:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

You still haven't put coloring in the eyes. He should have amber. Quailflight 16:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try to copy the eyes from another apprentice image like Shrewpaw. If not, I can do it for you.-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:35, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait. How's this? I changed the eye highlight to the eye color... Butterfly }  { Song!  14:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some eye-white. Bring up an apprentice image on your art program, and zoom ito his/her face. That should help with the eye color, pupil, and eye-white positions  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:50, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see a pupil. Just *a glint of amber eyes* xD Spri  ngs  tar  20:40, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

There is a pupil, and the eye white was preventing everyone from seeing his eye color. Make up your mind please! Butterfly } { Song!  16:09, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

No one said get rid of the eye highlight just change it's placement. Do what Night said look at some of the approved apprentice chatarts and copy the eye from there. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 16:33, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Or look here for how to do the eye. 雨 晶須  21:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedThank you for the Tutorial! I needed that, and I'll use it ffr. Butterfly } { Song!  16:40, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaller. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:52, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:55, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

The lines on the tails look messed up, I think you blurred it too much. Also, the eyes look more yellow than amber to me. I think you should highlight a bit more on the muzzle and the tip of the tail. FrostHeart 02:48, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks fine to me, and the eye is the same color as his other images  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:24, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry I didn't work on this sooner. my computer is being weird, could i have a couple of weeks or so so my parents can fix it? Butterfly } { Song!  00:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Seeing as nobody with the authority to do so has yet answered you, I'd personally say no to that request. It would be better if this was declined and then you can resubmit when your computer is fixed rather than leaving this up on the page for an indefinite time period. But it's not up to me. -- Sandy star 18:27, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ih.. sort of true, sort of not. Sandy here is still technically deputy, but she's taking a break. :) I can decline this and archive it, and you can resubmit when your computer is fixed. Declining; will archive later. Bram  ble  01:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving. Bram ble  16:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Moss (Q) - Declined


you like? i do i think its my best yet....constructmentsLionClaw132 03:50, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. Lighten that and make the ear pink smaller. Also darken the shading on the face-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:01, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where did the image go?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I put it back up. I think this is the right image? Dark hallows 16:03, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

yes thank you! my computer is bieng very very STUIPID it wont let me downlaod it! any ways comments?LionClaw132 00:00, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred the lineart on the back. S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 20:28, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Also rename the file to Moss.queen.png S n icker s      Life's a rollercoaster 20:29, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

btw i didnt blur the line art the queen image came like that so it cant be helped but i can fix the file LionClaw132 23:37, May 7, 2010 (UTC)&nbs o i nClaw L     Times running out

Lighten the shading. -- Icestorm Peace 19:41, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

And also thicken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:26, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on it or it will be declined. Dark hallows 20:57, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED-k this is the best i could do and Nightshine i dont think thicking it would helpLionClaw132 19:19, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lionclaw, this is not your image. You can't take credit for an image you didnt make. This is Leopardfoot's queen image. It's possible to be banned for a short period for claiming someone elses work. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:25, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, this is Leapordfoot's image. You can be banned if you don't admit that you didn't do it. Next time, do your own characts. FrostHeart 02:56, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

In which case this should be declined. -- Sandy star 18:29, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I was originally giving time for Lion to upload his own image, but since he's neglected to do so, declining doe to lack of work and art theft. -- Bram ble  01:39, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

sorry Bramble ;) *goes back to her hole* -- Sandy star 10:46, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Heh. :) Bram  ble  16:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)