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Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger. 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Not to be very picky, and this might just be me, but the shading is a little bit to dark overall. Could you just lighten it up? Also blur the tail shading too. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  20:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think this might be as ginger as it will get.. x3 But eh. 03:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight/lighter part/thing a bit bigger? 8D Sky Gatlocke 11:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Don't hate me, but she still looks like a light-brown cat 00:18, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmkay, I'll try my best, I'll upload soon x3 *doesn't hate you* 02:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe have the colors a bit closer to Brightheart or Flowerstar? don't hurt me! *hides*  00:12, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Scarlet, it's fine. XD I'm really sorry, I don't know what the problem is but whenever I try to make it more ginger, it looks so unnatural... Did my best, though. :3 Oh, and Sky, where? 05:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Meh, it was just a preference, I just thought the lighter part looked a little small on the shoulder. Sky Molto bene 23:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Ivy. It was just a preference, feel free to ignore it. Define the ear-pink a bit 23:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, uh, sorry. x3 Can choo define the neck shading if it's there, or is that whole bit shaded? x.x Sky Molto bene 23:52, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlight/lighter part on the shoulder. 06:13, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky Molto bene 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out and blur the chest, paws, and tail tip feathering; it looked a bit choppy 23:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste, Trolly. ^^; Also, blur the ear pink. 03:05, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add the slightest tad more opacity to the shading. *thought Cloudy was Sky e3e* 08:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yea, blur the shading, too. Forgot to mention that up ^^^there. Dazzle did what now? =P  09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge that hard edged bit off to the right on the white on the tail? How did you mistake her for my awesomeness? xD Sky Molto bene   12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over C:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 21:26, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I attempted to match it to the warrior image's pattern. Don't look at it, it's ugly D:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 22:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <3 Lovely Elo 22:03 Sun Mar 4

Blur it, too. 22:32, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match all that well. It seems like the alt apprentice's stripes were based off the normal warrior image, so using that as a ref on what it'd look like from this angle might help. 15:27, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I tried to match the warrior; I didn't suceed. Withdrawing because I don't want to get frustrated Dx  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 20:59, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 00:54, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:06, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Q) - Tweak
OAs were me and Sandstar12. Reason being unrealistic stripes. To be honest, I raged when I tried to copy my own stripes on her tail. So sorry if some look out of place because I kind of gave up XD 05:09, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur where the 'highlights' meet the shading on the belly. 8D Lovely~ 20:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on her haunch a bit. This is pretty... ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  00:02, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:03, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (W) ~ Redone
OA was Blackclaw09 and it needed to be redone because the shading was blotchy and highlights needed to be brightened. Also, I see the brown on her leg, I'll fix it in the next Upload. 23:01, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

he earpink is much to big, so make is smaller. Darken the shading, and blur where the white meet the brown just on the neck above the chin. Looks great! 23:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail, and the white on the back paw. There is also some brown mixed in with the white on the front paw (the one closest to us), and can you lighten the shading on the legs just a tad? 01:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

What's up with that ear pink, Rowan? Did you try it like the leader images? Define the shading, darken it, and define the highlight (or whatever it is) on the haunch, 'cause it looks like it's all shading. 04:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks neat to me. :P Can you blur that top part of the white? And (if possible, otherwise disregard this) make the white curve with the body a bit? Sky Molto bene 11:35, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and make the earpink less gray and more pink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:02, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried to make the earpink like the queen on my past one. 22:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white area more white it looks gray, also make it match the queen more, and lighten the image. 23:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 16:14, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you fix the earpink? It looks gray. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lightness on the face. Sky Molto bene 02:27, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, it looks kinda flat. 03:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm looking at the tweak nominations right now, and she just needed to be tweaked. You can leave yours, it's fine, but in the future pay attention to whether it's in the tweak or redo section. 17:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh I'm sorry Dx Re-Uploaded. 18:18, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (W) - Tweaked
I've been telling myself to tweak more chararts. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Night Shine. Shading had to be darker. 00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading. 00:53, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:56, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her shoulder. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  12:14, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define "highlight" on the shoulder, blur the earpink, and lighten the entire image to match. 22:51, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:26, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like there isn't any flecks on her shoulder, which doesn't match her queen. Maybe add some? 01:53, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:45, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add 2-3 more flecks to the shoulder, and blur the whole thing a bit more~ 06:46, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E)- Tweaked
Tweak patched cause they were too neon. OA=Ashshadow 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink match the patches' colour? Or do the other way around... 03:06, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - sorry it look a while, Im using my parent's laptop and I'm getting confused with all the files 04:01, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (D) - Tweaked
There are so many changes to this file, it's hard to keep track.. But the first OA was Sandy, with the most recent redo by Iceheart. He needed a floofy tail. 17:51, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the tail pweeze. Maybe make it a bit pineconey, kinda like Squirrelflight's? 23:55, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Or, if you want him to have a bottlebrush tail, go nuts with it. Yeah, that's a ferret's tail, but it's the first pic I found of a nutso bottlebrush tail. 00:14, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more 'floof' to the bottom where it's straight, kinda like the warrior? 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dat floof >:C 20:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the tail lineart some more. 21:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

See my comment on the warrior. I can't; there simply aren't enough pixels to fit all that 21:43, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (W) - Tweaked
Fluffff <3 OA was Insane with a redo by Iceheart. 18:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the bushy-ness more even at the top of the tail, it kind of dips. 21:59, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

And make the lines on the tail thicker. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't make the lines on the tail thicker or it won't look the same. Trust me. The same applies for the deputy. 20:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudberry (Q) - Redone
Redone to match warrior image. OA was Echomist with (minor) tweaks by Bramble and Ivy. 00:56, 11, 03, 2012

Blur the flank shading and enlarge the earpink a tad. 00:58 Sun Mar 11

Blur the tail shadin~ Sky Molto bene  02:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad more desturated? 06:11, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Rubblepaw (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Moonleaf, and needed to be darkened, for he's actually black. =3 I'm not changing anything except the darkness of the pelt. Comments? 17:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
I hope I'm doing this right... The patches were over-blurred in some places and shading was some-what blotchy. OA's were Sandstar, Bloo, and Leaf-storm. 19:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, you're fine. 8D Just lighten and blur the earpink. 21:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  22:23, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:24, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (Ki) - Tweaked
I didn't want him to be tweaked by someone else.... XD Alright so his tail needed to be bushier, and I personally have always hated the shading on him so since I had the xcf file I changed it. As well as a minor change to the eyes and colors to match. I love keeping xcf files.... XD OA was Nightfall with a redo by me. Comments? 20:49, March 11, 2012 (UTC)