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Lioneye (Unknown) ~ For Approval
this is ugly

No, this is actually quite pretty! Smooth out the shading a little overall, though. 01:03, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes 01:08 Wed Apr 25

Define the eye depth and expand the shading on the back on the base of the tail. Also, in --> ear, the ear pink needs to be extended. You have it all the way to the whiskers. I also think the eye postition forr --> side is a little off. Maybe make it more to the left. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 03:31, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

The eyeshine makes it look a little cross-eyed. Also this is beautiful shut your mouth. --

Vary the size/shape of the stripes slightly, as on the app and rogue they differ a little

There's some waste on <-- paw. 13:06, 4/25/2018

re-up this blank be complicated cosmo also i forgot some things upload later

You're welcome :). Also smooth out the shading behind the ears, and define it on the belly and front legs. This looks great! Needletail 🐾 #Litten 23:35, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading as well :3 pretty cat

re-up Thanks <3

I think there's some shading leaking where the tail meets the hind leg. And perhaps define the eye depth? This gorgeous! :D 15:23, April 27, 2018 (UTC)

re-up Aww, thanks!

Smooth out the shading on the base of the tail. Maybe add some shading to the little bit part of the chest that shows underneath the head. Maybe smooth out the shading on the belly and tail? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 13:10, April 28, 2018 (UTC)

re-up will add chest shading later

re-up

Define the shading a little in --> ear a tiny bit? 03:11, April 30, 2018 (UTC)

re-up

Smooth the shading on the tail a bit more. 00:45, 5/01/2018

per the kit that's the first in the set, stripes need to go across the belly

Smudge the tail stripes a bit more and I don't think there should be any stripes on the ears. 22:55, May 1, 2018 (UTC)

re-up Can I get a second opinion about the ears? bc I thought I did it correctly

If the kit is first then I think the pale on the paws should either be reduced significantly or shouldn't be there at all. The kit paws don't look pale at all imo (and I can't tell if there should be stripes on the ears or not)

re-up but I liked her pale paws

I don't know if it's me- but it seems her eyes are more like < > them > >. Also define the shading on --> back leg. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 00:24, May 5, 2018 (UTC)

I loooove this, it’s so good. Could you maybe smoothen out the shading on the front right paw just a bit? :) 05:45, May 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-up Aww, thanks! I want another opinion on the eyes since they look fine but I'll change them if I have to.

Dawnpelt (Unknown) ~ For Approval
i was going to put that this was really fun but i realised every single error with it as i hit upload so i'll fix the <<< front paw waste next upload --

Re-uploaded. --

This is beautiful! Can you define and expand the shading? And maybe add some to the belly. Unless you have some there already. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 10:55, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Expand the earpink in the ---> ear, past the whisker. Define the shading too; you did a nice job on this! 22:22, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

She looks kind of crosseyed.

Re-uploaded. okay so when I uploaded this it FINALLY snapped why the shading was hard to see - I colorpicked the shading from the starclan image when it was probably just black shading, I'm not sure if I'll redo the shading or nah though --

Can you define the shading everywhere and smooth it out as well? Also- maybe expand t on the head towards --> way? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 14:01, April 26, 2018 (UTC)

Could you expand the belly shading? 22:34, April 26, 2018 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ---> ear? 15:24, April 27, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?

hi yeah. im here, i just haven't been feeling too good for the past few days, but re-uploaded. -

The shading is leaking away from -> side of the head. Cool art! <span style="">13:35, 5/01/2018

Smooth out the shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 14:53, May 1, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little bit? especially on the belly

I think there is a little bit of shading in that hole surrounded by lineart between the back right leg and the front left leg...if you know what I mean. Idk how to redline but yeah. This looks great anyways! Sorry I couldn’t be a better help. 22:14, May 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. yeah haha i don't understand you winter --

Define and smooth out the shading.

The extra base/shading or whatever that I think Winter was referring to is those two pixels just to the right of that mostly hidden back leg; iirc that shouldn't be filled in with this blank

I also think the stripes are sharper on the other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 00:23, May 5, 2018 (UTC)

Still working? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 03:13, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Breezepaw (Ki) ~ CBA
colors are from Spooky's .psd file. Define the shading a tad and smooth it out? Also define the lighting on <-- paw. This looks cute! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 17:14, April 30, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Will define later.

Re-uploaded. Only took me a few days because of work, lmao.

CBA? 03:25, May 6, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to break the CBA, but could you maybe define the lighting on chest and smooth out the shading a tad? Also, define the lighting on <-- leg. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 03:48, May 6, 2018 (UTC)

I can't define the light on the leg without being told to expand the shading. This has almost the exact same amount of shading as my other images, and I honestly think it's fine as it is. I can't define something and then smooth it out, not without basically just killing one or the other...

Re-CBA? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 03:15, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt. App) ~ For Approval
I'm not proud of this. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 03:15, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

define the shading on the closest front leg

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 04:09, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

There’s some waste outside the front left paw. I think this looks great :) 04:17, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Micah (Ki) - For Evaluation


welp, my first charart. i think it sucks <font color="DarkBlue">Dusk Your best friend 23:51, May 7, 2018 (UTC)