Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Speckletail (W)~ Redone
OA was Nightshine and it needed to be brown and nobody likes triangle tabbies so heres this. 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot more, especially around the highlights (if you use them, of course) Guradian1098 01:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks pinkish-cream, not brown. 02:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

At least tint the base color to be more brown. 03:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ear farest from us. and her base coat looks gray, make the base coat match her elder. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't need to change it to match Oblivion's; she posted first, so Oblivion's should match hers. Lighten the shading a tad. 00:59 Sun Oct 30

As I suggested below, she should talk it over with Oblivion, and see what should be done. It shouldn't just be "Oh, she posted first" sort of thing. It's not fair to either artist. 23:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I've left Iceheart a message on her talk page. Now it's just a matter of waiting until she replies :3 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- sorry guys ive been crazy busy. 01:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She still needs to be more brown. This looks cream. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:31, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The changes werent showing... They are now. 08:58, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

No, I was looking at the right version. I still think it needs to be browner. It looks like cream still. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:03, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? 16:04, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Redone
The next one on her lineup. Redone to match the MC. Comments? 00:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the artist before you? And maybe add some more stripes so it matches the medicine cat image .Blur the ear pink, too Guradian1098 01:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I don't know and tbh I don't care. I can't add anymore stripes because I don't know where to put them, but I will blur the ear pink. 01:17, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It took me a few seconds to look up the OA of this image. 02:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, I'm not you, and for your information, this project is concerned for the welfare of images and not for OAs. 02:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Icestorm, it's not that big of a deal and I thought we were supposed to say the OA anyway? Lighten the shading on her flank a tad. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Does it really matter who the OA is? Sometimes, it's hard to tell, 'cause most of these were moved from other file names. 02:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have shading on the flank. Do you mean the midriff? 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Flank = the area where your kidneys are. Judging by its location in a human, as well as Brackenfur's scar, I'd say it's where the shading is too dark. 02:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ohfail. I was thinking the My Little Pony flanks...where they have their cutie marks...yeahsorry XD 02:54, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink a bit. 19:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there's some smudged lineart on the tail; fix that. 06:09 Sun Oct 30

Re-Uploaded: Lightened shading on flank, blurred back shading, blurred earpink. Where is the smudged lineart? The lineart is perfectly fine. 14:29, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there waste all around the image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not. There is waste all around it. 16:49, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 10:14 Mon Oct 31

And blur the ear-pink too. 17:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Icey, you still working on this? 18:08, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. I'll be working on this, its just my internet is failing me. 146.115.179.113 23:45, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Wildy though, the earpink does need to be lightened. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same color as her MC. (Icy) 146.115.179.113 23:27, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, honestly, that should have been changed too. IT's REALLY red. If it was only a little red, I'd get over it, but it bothers me when it this over-red. Please change it? *puppy dog eyes* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:25, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (CG) - Redone
OA was Hiddensun. It needed to be brown-gray and was on the redo list. Comments? 03:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, the stripes look hard-edged. Blur them, please. Beautiful image, by the way ^^ -Guradian04:06, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Didn't Dapplecloud reserve her elder version already?... 21:47, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, dang it, she did. I'll ask her if I can have it since I already put this up, but I'm fine if it gets declined. 22:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She's been busy lately, so she told me that you can have it. 22:00, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, any more comments? 22:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink smaller and redder? Nice work. :D 22:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:22, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure, but I think that her nose should be gray. Smudge the mud a tad on the flank - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:16, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:56, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken the nose more and center the earpink? This is great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:09, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done and done. 18:32, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ruby (KP) - Redone
I saw the shadings need blurring, I was thinking that I can only tweak but when I looked on it on my computer i saw that whole lineart is blurred. I take the base colour from it, other are new. OA is, I think MosspathOfSkyClan, Leaf-storm,13:25,November 2,2011 (UTC)

Was this on the list? And did you get permission to redo her? 19:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She also needs a black/dark grey nose. Sky- Gathering the army of  Trolls 22:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think Leaf's okay with this one. Blurred lineart is a pain in the butt to fix. xD 00:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I tryied fix it but i only made it worse, dark nose, yes here it is Leaf-storm,19:10,November 3,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 00:25 Fri Nov 4

How was is now? :-) Leaf-storm,13:15,November 4,2011 (UTC)

NEW reupload, I learned the layers in Gimp :-) Leaf-storm,20:51,November 4,2011 (UTC)

It's a lot darker than the other images, lighten it some. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:24, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,10:07,November 5,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it too. It's blotchy. 17:53, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

yes, now? Leaf-storm,16:10,November 6,2011 (UTC)

It's still awfully blotchy in some areas. Really blur it good, making sure the blur tool is on 100. 16:50, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I have it always on 100% right and now? Leaf-storm,19:33,November 6,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights more. 04:22 Mon Nov 7

Blurring,blurring, small break, blurring, hmm still blotchy?!!! Leaf-storm,15:01,November 7,2011 (UTC)

Hmm I think its worse, I need little hint because Im blind and I cant see that blotchy areas :-) Leaf-storm,15:09,November 7,2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the charart. Mostly I think the shading isn't as dark/light in some places and that messes up the consistency. Maybe redo the shading? 21:29 Mon Nov 7

Poppydawn (E) - Redone
Original artist was Dawnfeather, and she needed to be dark red. I took her colors from the warrior image. ;3 21:18, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't Ivystripe supposed to do this? Oh well, I think it's okay for now. Anyways, there's some waste on one of the tufts on her back. 21:21, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

And on the back of the head, too. 21:22, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Edit conflicts. DX I was about to say the same thing. Ivy IS supposed to do this I believe. Well, if this stays up, make the eyes look a bit more amber and less brown. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:24, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I would have kind of liked to do this, but unless the other leads force you to remove it, I'll be ok with it staying up. The colors look a tad lighter darker than in mine, and make the earpink slightly bigger and curve with the ear. 21:27, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

You edit conflicter D:< Anyways, this is fine. What's done is done and this is outstanding - it matches yours perfectly, Ivystripe. Anyways, can you define the muzzle a tad? 21:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh you reuploaded your while I was doing this, so I took the colors from a previous version. That's why it's darker looking. But yeah, I was just told about this rule and it seems pretty pointless. I mean, as long as the person matches it pretty well they should be able to put it up, like Icy said. :P 21:34, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok, mine just looked brown to me and I couldn't stand it. I just put on a little more orange tint with the opactiy turned down. 21:35, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just my computer, but is there waste surrounding the image? 22:59, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nope I see waste, too. Erase it, please :3 Other than that, wonderful job. 23:31 Thu Nov 3

Reuploaded. I took into consideration some of her warrior's comments too, so it's a little more ginger than the warrior. :3 17:57, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make her muzzle a bit more gray; it looks kinda tawny. xP - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:14, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? 16:03, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (KP) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sunspirit. Tweaked it to change the colour of the white and blurred/tweaked the shading a lot. Comments? 23:28 Thu Nov 3

Aww, cute. ^_^ There's a little patch that isn't shaded on the neck. If you didn't understand that, I'll try to explain again. :P 00:01, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded haha thanks 00:11 Fri Nov 4

He didn't have the scar as a kittypet. 00:13, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ...durh 00:17 Fri Nov 4

Make the white blurring on his face a little less extreme. 01:50, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

White blurring? I'm sorry that went right over my head XD explain? 19:36 Sat Nov 5

I think oblivion means the smudging. You could probably just blur the smudging on the face a bit and it'd be good. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:39, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:13 Mon Nov 7

Dark (TB) - Tweaked
My very first charart has returned <3 Anywho, we decided the To-be's got to have mud. So.. here he is. OA was me. Comments? 19:45, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the mud, it's kinda hard to see. 21:05, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 21:55, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud more brown. Right now it kinda looks pinky :P 23:09 Sat Nov 5

The best thing to do would to be to take it off an approved black cat with mud (such as Screech) Don't worry, mud color can be hard :S  15:17, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsetail (NP)(W) - Redone
He needed to be redone as tawny, and the OA was Bracken- 21:38, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the ear-pink a tad and I think the ear furthest from us should be in shadow but I'm not positive. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:31, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blizzardstar (L) - Tweaked
Finally, a leader! Original artist was Echomist, and the shading needed to be blurred, but when I blurred it, I didn't like how it turned out, so I re-did the shading. 02:44, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

He looks kinda gray, lighten him and enlarge the chest highlight - 02:51, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the ear-pink as well. Extend the light onto bits of the upper forelegs and define the face highlight. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:29, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also add a white pixel to the eye. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:17, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:18, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks a bit a bit gray, can you lighten him again? 23:22, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

And brighten his earpink a tad. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:57, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it white enough now? 00:56, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but saturate the earpink a bit more and brighten the eyes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:32, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine to me. 04:15 Mon Nov 7

Breezepelt (W) - Redone
Blarg... Black cats are definitely not my specialty... Anyway, shading was blotchy and needed to be thickened, his pelt color needed to be darkened, and his ear-pink was a bit smudgy so I redid him. OA was Sandy. Took all the colors from Reedwhisker's warrior charart. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:28, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lessen the shading a bit, or make the highlights bigger. 04:57, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights tons and brighten them, and I agree, make them bigger - 16:20, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:18, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 03:14, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a highlight on the tail? If so blend it together with the shading\pelt color. 23:33, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:13, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (R) ~ Redone
OA was Goldenpaw, needed to be gray-brown. Comments? 21:14, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

As lovely as this is, it needs to match Shellheart's version. <span style="">21:16 Sat Nov 5

Isn't Shelly supposed to do this? I just relized. 21:18, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, she is. I assumed she had already given you permission to do it, but if you ask her and she says yes, you can do it. <span style="">21:29 Sat Nov 5

Yes, you can do it if you want, but it'll be hard to match my stripes with the mud in the way... you sure you want to try? 21:59, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will try. 22:01, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then, you need to work with the colors off of my image. Also, I gave her a marbled tabby pattern, and I believe she was still wearing mud as a rouge because she was still in the mountains and was probably still using it so she wouldn't be caught by eagles. 00:53, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink too? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:31, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. blah... 16:15, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

You got the pattern right, but the stripes should be sharpened. I barely blurred them on the cave-guard image. 16:22, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Make them more hard-edged and darken the earpink just slightly. <span style="">03:30 Mon Nov 7

Also, lighten it a bit. Looks like you worked form the shaded part of my charrt. 17:39, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Screech (TB) - Tweaked
Needed mud, OA was Blackclaw09 and me (I redid it). I wanted to do his since I still had the layers for his to-be and from his prey-hunter (for the mud). I'll do Poppydawn's queen after this since it shouldn't take long to get approved. Comments for improvement? 04:58, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

The mud seems sorta sharp around the edges to me...maybe blur a weenie bit? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 03:13, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (K) - Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. He looks adorable. xD Comments? 15:26, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he be redone to match his warrior image? The pattern and shade of brown on that one is different. 15:27, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried.... stupid me, forgot to save the xcf. file before. 18:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Did Iceheart give you permission to do this? <span style="">04:18 Mon Nov 7

It was on the redo list, so it's fine. 14:53, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

I love it! Try to connect the patches on the head maybe. Also redden the ear pink. So cute! 15:43, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Even though this was on the redo list, Snowy still needs to get Iceheart's permission, 'cause Iceheart redid the warrior version. <span style="">20:18 Mon Nov 7

That was before the rule was made. The images created before the rules was made don't count. 20:22, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

How so? That wasn't outlined in the rule when it was made. <span style="">21:24 Mon Nov 7

Iceheart said it herself. Check here, if you don't believe me. 21:30, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, I remember that, but it was originally her image, and she did say that even though it's not officially retroactive, she'd like it to be unofficially so. Sorry, Cloudy and Snowy, I'm not trying to be nitpicky <3 It's just I know she loves the warrior image and I think she'd want to make the kit image as consistent as possible. Honestly, it doesn't matter a whit to me, but she's not here to argue her point, so... I dunno. I'd just recommend asking Iceheart first. <span style="">21:38 Mon Nov 7

Iceheart was the OA of the warrior image? Stupid me. *facepalm* I'll be careful next time. Sorry 'bout all the flapdoodle. I'll leave a message on Iceheart's page. And its fine Wldheart, no worries. ;) 00:01, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rock (CG) - Redone
I got permission from Scarletwind to redo this, and she recommended me to make him longhaired because of his "jagged" tail, but it was too late. Original artist was Grayravenpaw, and it needed to be more brown instead of reddish-brown. 15:45, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud more noticeable. 20:22, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make his tail look "jagged"? It looks clean cut off. 21:16, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Rushtail (WC) (E) - Redone
Original artists were Sandstar12 and Bracken-. He needed to be shorthaired. His original color came across to me as more of a ginger than creamy-brown, so I changed that. 16:48, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and saturate this a bit. It's supposed to be creamy BROWN, not light cream, but this is absolutely gorgeous~ Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:38, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the shading. :) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 03:08, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw: I used Daisy's color, who is also described as creamy brown, so I'm not going to change it. 19:40, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

In that case, darken the earpink a bit. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 00:45, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Splash (PH) - Tweaked
I only made mud streaks a little realistic, it was on the list.. OA Leopardclawxx and the description says she have stubby tail, tell me if I can do it too, Leaf-storm,17:15,November 6,2011 (UTC)

Pebble (TB) - Tweaked
Reposting now. :P Needed mud and OA was Dawnfeather. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:34, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading/highlights on the mud - 18:05, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:24, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (W) - Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Echoheart. Comments? 23:36, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. 12:27, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Owlstar (D) ~ Redone
OA is Honeyfur, and since it needed to be uploaded under Owlstar.deputy instead of Owlstar (SotC).deputy, I just uploaded it under the proper file name. Changes...well, it needs to match his leader. 02:53, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail and haunch shading. 23:29, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:31, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mothflight (W)- Redone
Needed to be short haired, me thinks? OA is Warriors808. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 03:32, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail, or lengthen the shading on the tail. 19:42, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 20:42, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Snake (Ro) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be tweaked. Don't judge - five minute job. Tell me what I missed in my quick tweaking. <span style="">05:15 Mon Nov 7

Oh, and OA was Flamingomom <span style="">05:33 Mon Nov 7

Just blur the shading a bit more, I think. 17:37, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">21:18 Mon Nov 7

Shorty (R) ~ Redone
OA was Shadowedheart, and I redid it because the stripes were unrealistic. Scarletwind gave me permission to redo this. 00:09, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Pine (TS) (Ro) - Redone
FAIL. My first rogue (odd, huh?). He needed to match the manga. OA was Brambleclaw. 00:15, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (W) - Tweaked
The other ear needed to be torn....and....Erm...not sure about the history of this one. Help? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 03:18, November 8, 2011 (UTC)