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Rainleap (Star) ~ CBA
Long overdue... because no one wanted hurr :3 23:14, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the faces stripes a bit more and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more? 23:53, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to be difficult, but I purposely matched Rainleap's face stripes, though they may be a little dark, to their blurring. If anything, I'd say they need to be blurred more. I'll change them if someone else says something :3 05:21, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

They're a touch too blurred and a little too dark. 16:53, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like pizza.

I think the chest and that little spot of shading between her chin and her shoulder could be blurred a bit. Nice! 01:26, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

I think her stripes may be just a little too dark. 03:25, 04/15/2013

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad? 22:18, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Iight, will be uploading when I can find time! :( seriously teachers need to know we like things other than school really 02:10, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:26, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to rush you guys, but it's been over 24 hours without comment and I really wanted to get in a good starclan kit image when the blanks come out, so critique? 05:57, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a little over-smudged at the ends, perhaps smudge them a tiny bit? 06:02 Sun Apr 21

Sorry Bloo, but you made absolutely no sense to m XD 05:43, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant over-blurred at the ends. 05:50 Mon Apr 22

User's a COPPA violation and got banned. This is declined. Anyone who wants to take over and work on it may do so.

I'll take over. 01:20, 04/24/2013

Re-uploaded Ehh.. Not sure I like how the shading turned out. :\ 01:35, 04/24/2013

Perhaps define the shading on the tail? 07:10 Wed Apr 24

I personally thing the tail shading is fine, but perhaps ass some shading to the upper arm on <--this side? 07:12 Wed Apr 24

Re-uploaded Added some shading on the arm. Personally, I think the tail shading is fine. 12:48, 04/24/2013

Blur the haunch shading, and perhaps make the stripes match more by blurring them a bit? The warrior's stripes look a bit softer than this. Nice work! Bb un   legs  18:15, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit darker on the warrior. 22:48, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

The belly shading looks like it should be smudged and blurred in a little bit more. Nice job! --Sea Light (talk) 16:36, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Her shoulder that is facing us is a bit flat, could you add some shading to the curve of the shoulder that is near her chest? Also, I think the face stripes on her forehead should come down a little further, to match the warrior. Beautiful! 22:57, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 03:19, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the late upload, life has been pretty busy lately. x.x The head stripes blurring came out sort of weird, I may try and fix that in a bit. 01:15, 05/1/2013

Define the shading on the tail a lil' bit? 00:50 Fri May 3

The stripes still look darker on the warrior. 22:00, May 3, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading on her shoulder and chest area could be blurred just a bit. 01:18, May 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:35, 05/5/2013

Define the shading on the tail and blur it on the haunch? 14:19, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:12, 05/10/2013

CBA? 03:44, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Blossomkit (Star) - CBA
First white cat. Comments? 21:17, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC).star.png. 21:21, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

How? It won't let me. 21:28, April 21, 2013 (UTC)



Does it make sense taht i made more nicely? Spaniel78CP (talk) 22:23, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Span, it doesn't matter;Sorrel reserved it first, the image is her's. Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 22:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

In all honesty, I prefer Sorrel's image ouo;; Anyways, Sorrel, this is beautiful! It seems that there's a background or something outside the image. Couldja erase that? -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 23:22, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel, just re-upload it as a new file and mark the old one for deletion. 03:27, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Echo, she can't make her background transparent. Sorrel, if you'd like, once your image is approved, I can take care of that for you~

'Kay, sorry, but for what infinite reason can Sorrel not make the background transparent? It's a simple process that takes no more than a few minutes and is super easy to learn. It's ridiculous that she cannot make a transparent background considering the art she has done. I honestly do not think that this should be approved with the background like that. She needs to learn how to do it herself, it's not that hard. Add some depth to the eyes and define the tail shading a bit. 03:47, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

'teldy, it's Pixlr, not her. ._. It often does that for people. I've had that issue myself, honestly. No need to get snippy about it.

'Reuploaded' Alright, teldy. It's not my fault. Pixlr dosen't let me save so I have to copy paste it. This is a permanant problem, I'm afraid - so thank you, kelsey, do make it transparent once its approved. I've stated this background problem many times. >.< Renamed, eye depth and tail defined. 14:41, April 22, 2013 (UTC)


 * Yeah, no, sorry. I do not accept that excuse. Even paint has the ability to make something transparent. In fact, there are several other ways to solve this problem than relying on someone else to complete the job for you. It's fine if it's just a first and you're experimenting with digital art, but considering how far you come, there really is no excuse for you not to be able to find a way to make something transparent. Go talk to multiple artists, look it up on youtube, convert to another digital art program, etc. There are copious more ways to approach this situation than sitting there and begging for help with one of the simple steps of making digital art. 22:08, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Its no excuse! I'm serious! And I am not begging. 22:21, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel, if you need any help with Pixlr, I can help you, I've been using that program for quite awhile now, Anyways define the unshaded parts on the tail. Also, Echo please do not say that you prefer one image over another, I find that very rude, and it would lower my self-esteem if that was said to myself. owo 22:43, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not doubting that Pixlr doesn't work for you with transparency, I use the diction of "excuse" as an expression of curiosity as to why you have not figured out an alternative method. You said you copy and paste the image. On to what? MS Paint? Because there are ways to do transparency on MS Paint. Or ask someone else who does Pixlr like Duck offered, in fact on the "front page" of PCA where the mentor program is, it shows you specific people who use Pixlr and want to help other users. You don't need to be an apprentice to go ask a mentor for help. That's why they're there, as a reference for specific people (apprentices) and for anyone who's having a bit of difficulty with something. The fact of the matter is that I do not want to see you be held back from this one simple obstacle. 23:12, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define eye depth and tint shading because it looks a little gray. No need to attack sorrel for sorrel's pixlr's issue, this is an easy problem to fix if you simply tell her how. Just download gimp here, paste the image into the gray screen with the fox in the background (don't hit new, just paste into the window), use the paint bucket with a bright unused color to fill in the background. Hit the background with the tool with the three colored boxes and the pointer finger and the background should be outlined with dashed lines. hit delete and save the image, tadaa. Everyone okay? yay. you're welcome. ;P 01:13, April 23, 2013 (UTC)


 * Except not everyone can download GIMP, nor does everyone want to. 01:19, April 23, 2013 (UTC)


 * How do we know sorrel isn't willing to download GIMP? Before we try to come to conclusions, let's see what Sorrel is willing to do. 02:24, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

I think Sorrel's already said something about not being able to download GIMP? Anyways, can we shift the focus back to the image, please? Is the entire tail supposed to be in shadow, Sorrel? If not, could you possibly add a highlight or two? Or just erase some shading; either method will work.

Reuploaded Teldy, when you say 'ms paint' do you mean this? 14:56, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made the shading less grey a bit more. 15:01, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Yep. 20:11, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Define where the shading is exactly. 22:49, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:42, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

I'm still having trouble picking out the shading from the base. 21:16, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, Sorrelflower, that is what I mean by MS Paint. The shading is a bit blotchy right now, the earpink could be a bit more noticeable and the fur in the ear could be a bit more blurred. 21:45, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded then how do I make it transparent? 16:06, April 26, 2013 (UTC)


 * Paste the image on paint, and then paste the lineart of the cat onto paint in another area other than where your charart is. Then, where there are the shapes, choose the rectangle one, change your color to gray (or another color other than black) and then select the lineart by drawing a rectangle around it (it doesn't have to be right where the lineart starts or stops so long as the lineart is inside the rectangle). Once you do that, there should be an border of gray around your charart. Then use the bucket tool and fill in the space between the lineart and the border in gray (or the other color you decided to use, but make sure it's consistent; make sure you're not filling inside the lineart, just the outside). Then, re-select the lineart with just the select tool and, once again, go around the lineart (it's okay to include some of the gray, in fact, I'd recommend it). Go back to where the select button is and click the down arrow, then select "Transparency Selection". Move the lineart over your actual charart, and then use the bucket tool to make it white. Re-select the charart with the lineart over it and move it to the corner of the canvas, and then minimize the canvas until the edges are touching the lineart (you'll have to make sure that this part is right on so that you don't mess with the dimensions and have it the right size). Sorry, it's a lot of textual explanation, but the video showing this was deleted from youtube and I don't have time to do a full tutorial to show you. I can quickly do a join.me though if you can catch me online sometime. ;) 21:49, April 28, 2013 (UTC)


 * Still not working.Can we do a join.me sometime? 17:02, April 29, 2013 (UTC)


 * May I ask for comments (not on the transparency business)? It's been a while... 17:36, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

Hrm..aside from the transparency (which can be fixed very easily. If you are unable, I still stand by my offer), this is quite a wonderful image. Perhaps define the shading just a smidge on the belly-area?

Reuploaded Please do, Cloudy. 18:11, May 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading just a tad on the tail, mainly where the shading meets the base coat? Nice work. Bb un   legs  23:04, May 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded thank you Beebs x3 23:40, May 3, 2013 (UTC)

Can I have some comments, please? Or is this ready? 21:34, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps add more depth to the  chest shading? Then it'll look ready C: Bb  un   legs  21:35, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded does this look ready? 21:42, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit flat 22:58, May 8, 2013 (UTC)

How would I fix that? 16:04, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Try unblurring it, Sorrel. I understand that the blur tool is a pain in the butt on Pixlr, though. If you honestly /can't/ do it, then that's okay. Just give it a shot first, and see what it turns out as.

Reuploaded well, I tried. 16:36, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? 03:46, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oddfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
Starclan, these blanks suck...

And the foot looks terrible too. And I'm not even gonna start on the shading...Pikachushinx the power of the past 11:00, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Can you match the stripe pattern more, and make his face, chest and belly paler, like the warrior? 15:00, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sure, lemme just finish what I'm doing first<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 15:30, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I would just say to make the twisted paw point inward instead of to his other forepaw. 21:24, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'll add to Sorrel's comment of matching stripes: Could you kind of sharpen them up, and add several more around the charart, then smudge them, like the warrior image? Also, extend the "m" on his forehead up a little, to make it longer. Pfft. He looks cool. 01:04, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

The light source on the head is different than the rest of the body. Move it so that it casts shadow on the right side of his face and light on the left. 04:40, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't do anything else with those stripes. I fixed the stripes, the foot, and the shading.<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 08:38, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

It needs a transparent background, there's an unfilled pixel on the top of the head, and there needs to be a pale belly, muzzle, and paws. Also, stripes need to match the warrior more, in where they're placed and how they're smudged. <span style="">12:19, 04/23/2013

Okay. The background isn't transparent though? I remember making it transparent...<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 14:02, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a wee bit, too? It looks too dark. 18:36, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Try look (not copy) at Thai's version for help on the pattern. 18:48, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 10:48, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Darkness of the shading is the artist's choice. Blur the unshaded parts a bit so they blend more, and maybe make the parts a bit bigger on the chests and the front paws? 01:15, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm still working. I need to get a turn on my computer first though. My brother won't let me on >.><span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 14:53, May 1, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but you need to upload, and you haven't in over a week. Per the guidelines, this is declined. I'm terribly sorry, Shinx, but these are the rules, and we can't make exceptions. x.x

Mind if I take over? <span style="">05:24 Fri May 3

So here's the little guy. Comments for improvements on Oddfoot? <span style="">08:08 Fri May 3

Lighten the stripes a slight bit, and possibly make the injured paw higher by a few pixels, so it doesn't look quite so even with his other paw. Wonderful image! 22:02, May 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:21 Fri May 3

He's a little too light to match. Darken and maybe try to saturate him some more. Sorry for the delay in commenting. 14:17, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:38 Mon May 6

Perchkit (Star) ~ For Approval
Ugh this took forever and I'm still not happy with it. Comments? 22:03, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

The kit looks as though it has a blue-ish tinted shading. <span style="">23:35 Sat Apr 27

There's a random black line on his shoulder that isn't part of the lineart. 22:53, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think the shading has a tint in it. It might be your computer. Define the tail shading a tad, it looks kinda flat. 23:32, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Changes aren't showing, but I did everything except tint the shading. I haven't tinted my shading before, so I'm working on that, depending on how that looks, I'll upload that version. 21:36, May 2, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 03:45, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but could you at least try to tint the shading, it doesn't match very well imho without the shading tinted like it is on the kit. 11:56, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- I tried. Changes aren't showing. <font color="#00CC66">Sho <font color="#66FF99">ond <font color="33FF99">erp  <font color="#CC99FF">Like nobody’s around~  18:52, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 22:57, May 8, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry but can you define the shading on the arm closest to us, it's a little overblurred looking to me 01:00, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- I think I made it worse... <font color="#00CC66">Sho <font color="#66FF99">ond <font color="33FF99">erp  <font color="#CC99FF">Like nobody’s around~  01:11, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded again -- I forgot about the waste xD And i don't think changes are showing. <font color="#00CC66">Sho <font color="#66FF99">ond <font color="33FF99">erp  <font color="#CC99FF">Like nobody’s around~  01:13, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Larchkit (Star) ~ For Approval
I love her design C:. Comments and suggestions for improvement on Larchie-Archie? I'll fix up the front shoulder shading and the tail shading soon to match the light source. Bb un   legs  01:39, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and give them a little more of a wave. They seem a little too straight. Also define the shading a bit.

Re-up. How's this? Also, fixed the tail and front arm shading to correspond with the light source. Bb un   legs  01:53, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

The wave in the stripes looks to block-y. Make it more of a smooth transition from crest to trough, rather than the crest jutting out of the stripe. 02:42, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine. You see cats with this pattern all the time. :s 05:17, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Leggo. Also, brighten the ear pink a bit, too. I can't see it, and it looks brighter on the kit.

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  15:30, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 22:57, May 8, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but the pattern does not match. If you look on the kit they are more broken up on the chest and the way you have them coming forward on the back and haunch does not look natural at all. Change the angle of them and make them go with the shape of the cat better. 03:48, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Marigoldkit (Star) - For Approval
Ugh I'm sorry this looks so bad x.x I'm going to try getting the file for this so I can get the colors for it, and it was really hard to tell what was brown and what was the fur texture, but I promise that this will be fixed here soon. Please don't comment on that part as I already know this and I can't do much about it at the moment ^^; 05:30, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

I don;t think she was ever seen in StarClan, was she? 07:28, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Nope, she was never seen in StarClan, all we know is that she died. 12:01, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Then why was there a cite for her and Mintkit? :l 14:55, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

There's only a cite for her being dead on her page, same with Mintkit. There's no cite for them being in StarClan. 01:48, May 7, 2013 (UTC)

You've gotta be freaking kidding me! I know I saw a cite there, ugh. 00:13, May 8, 2013 (UTC)

Primrosepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
um idk whether to put this up now or what I'm just gonna leave it here and see how it goes 01:33, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! The shading looks kinda blotchy, there seems to be a cream spot on the farthest paw, and it also seems gray. Also, I'm having trouble seeing the eye color. 12:22, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine, honestly.