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Willowpelt (K) ~ For Approval
This looks horrible I know 09:25, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the face a bit, and there's leaking shading along the face, foreleg, and haunch. 02:02, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:59, December 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail. Also, the shading is leaking on the haunch and I think the face as well (I'm not sure if the light between the shading and lineart on the face is intentional, but I don't think it should be there anyway given your source). 14:42, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pink seems to be fading on <—— side of the ear. I’m not sure if you did that on purpose but it seems like it just doesn’t fit right with the image--​​​​​​ 16:15, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

its a stylist kinda thing, ear fur doesn't have to fill the entire lineart, and adding to Ivy's comment, the depth could definitely be defined as well 17:34, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Similar with the warrior, the eye color needs to match the set. This looks a little too dark right now. -- 17:39, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I referenced the eyes from the StarClan file btw 06:31, December 27, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the jaw and hind leg. 00:20, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:28, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still leaking in the areas Patch mentioned. -- 23:35, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

I can provide a red line if you need one. 18:51, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, please! 22:05, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

here are the spots I was talking about, hope this helps^^ 17:32, December 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 09:23, January 1, 2020 (UTC)

There's still shading leaking in the areas Patch mentioned. Add some more shading along the lower jaw, behind the ear closest to us, and the back heel/haunch area peeking out from behind. 00:22, January 2, 2020 (UTC)

I probably won't get this done. I'd like to withdraw. 09:48, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

I'll take over. 02:54, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:45, January 7, 2020 (UTC)'''

Smooth out that edge of shading on the haunch closest to the rump, please. ​​​

'''reuploaded. 15:35, January 7, 2020 (UTC)'''

Remove some shading on top of the front paw and define the light on the tail a bit. 22:56, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:34, January 10, 2020 (UTC)'''

Add more light on the tail, and remove some of the shading on the <<<< sides of the both ears

Still working?

Wasptail (W) ~ For Evaluation
The stripes aren't the most matching and best I know, but I like it. I'll tweak them better after advice. 10:36, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Waste 10:39, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you add some shading depth! They're very pretty!! 19:23, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Given your light source, flip the shading on the top of the tail to the bottom of the tail. And perhaps recede the shading on the chin and muzzle? The stripes should also be more jagged to match the apprentice. Whoops didnt see you already commented on that 20:07, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

The stripes should be thinner and sharper, more jagged like Egg said. Overall, I think what Thunder had originally matches better in terms of stripe style if you want to reference that ^^ 21:27, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you give the stripes a bit of a more "fuzzy" look to match the set? I think using a rough/fuzzy brush and continually smudging back and forth will help to achieve that. -- 23:44, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

I don't seem to have the brush in my paint program. Maybe I could just smudge the stripes? (I use Medibang paint pro) 01:56, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

If you don't have a fuzzy brush, try smudging with a 1px brush back and forth. -- 01:59, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up I hope they're fuzzier 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the face? 21:26, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. It's looking good! 21:39, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Thanks! 23:32, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

https://vvcap.com/BU9i3RstJ here's a redline for shading that's leaking, to fix it, just use your paintbrush/pencil tool (whatever one you use) and fill it in so all the pixels are filled up to the line art. https://vvcap.com/DDz3migeT here's another reline where shading needs to be added/defined, i didn't redline the face, but could you define the shading depth there too? with the placement you're using, there shouldn't be shading on the back of the tail like you have it right now. you're doing a great job on this! 17:03, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up  09:43, January 12, 2020 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail, because in the last update, it disappeared and add a little shading to the back leg closest to us. This looks very good. C: 03:54, January 13, 2020 (UTC)

I would darken the shading tint some - I am aware it is artist choice, usually, but when it is plopped next to the apprentice, it's a stark difference and throws off the set coherency imo. Just making it darker, with perhaps a touch more brown, should do.

Maybe smooth the shading, too? 19:45, January 13, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up I didn't really 'add a touch of' brown, because the shading was purple. Perhaps I should make it black/brown? 03:16, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

With your source, the shading on the top of the tail needs to be on the bottom. Smooth out the shading, and yes tint it black/brown. -- 03:25, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Made the tint black. 09:53, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more, add light to the front paws and shading to the back paws, and there's some leaking shading on the haunch. -- 13:52, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up  00:07, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paws, I think you may have removed too much. Smooth out the shading, especially on the shoulder and haunch, and expand/define it on the face. Curve the back leg shading to the way it is positioned (example here) and do the same for <<< that ear. Also lighten the earpink, it is too dark and doesn't match the apprentice. -- 00:12, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but could you add some depth to the face. 20:56, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up  01:38, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

The shading on the legs seems a tad overblurred, which still makes the shading hard to see in that area. Also, add more shading along the face (expand it) and to help, add some shading surrounding the muzzle. -- 01:45, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

Define shading in the ear and the shading depth on --> side. way down  hadestown    |undefined    01:52, 1/17/2020 ​  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    01:52, 1/17/2020 ​

Re-up  23:20, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference. Add more shading to the legs and trace the muzzle with shading. -- 23:34, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

Deceased brown rogue she-cat (R) - CBA
A deceased rogue Thunderstar and Lightning Tail find in Thunderstar's Echo. -- 02:56, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us? The little section at the top of the leg probably wouldn't stretch that far out to show the difference between belly and leg.

Reuploaded -- 21:08, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Might you expand the shading a bit overall? I'm finding it super rough to really see and the rest of the image appears rather flat. ​

Reuploaded Whoops, forgot to mention I did stuff earlier. -- 03:41, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

CBA?

Shellfur (Alt Ki) ~ CBA
yEET

I do think the eye color should match the normal set - now that that is the main set, for consistency, since he never did have a blue eye mistake.

Was he ever described with any eye color?--​​ 03:14, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

He hasn't, Ocean, but the alt should match what eye color his main set should have (basically what Spooky said). -- 03:42, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

ah, ok. 03:45, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

re-up oui

CBA?

Birchface (Alt W) - For Approval
red is not dark brown/almost black. was unsure if I needed to make him a tabby or a solid, but I can always re-add the stripes and whatnot if need be.

Smooth out shading by the hind leg? It doesn’t seem to fade at all, it looks unnatural.-- 03:16, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but I think it's also the texture, not quite so much my shading. I did fiddle with everything in an attempt to fix it.

It does look better. I think it’s the texture, it shows up weird on my iPad.-- 20:42, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

Tortie kittypet - CBA
she's finally here. 23:13, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

CBA?

Stoatfur (BS) (Alt.W) - For Approval
added a sublte bounce light effect