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Feathertail (Sc) - Redone
i apologize, for it has been quite a white since i made art here. anyway, redid to be more silver-gray, like her momma. 16:33 Sat Aug 1

This should be named Feathertail.star.png, Splook; why didn't you just upload over the original? She needs the bushy tail, define the shading a tad, and darken the stripes just a bit. 16:47 Sat Aug 1

Give Splook a break. She /just/ came back. Can you lighten the paw shading? This is beautiful, Splook. I'm going to have a really hard time matching this ._. 17:01, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. i told you i hadn't done this in awhile so i apologize that i didn't name it correctly. 21:52 Sat Aug 1

Do you mind smudging/blurring the tail stripes a tad? This is beautiful Splook. =) 22:35, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. thank you! :> 00:30 Sun Aug 2

Could u smudge the ear pink more? And define the shading on the legs. Nice work! 01:22, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? I think her tail should be more... fuzzy? A tail wouldn't be smooth edged like this? I'm not sure. Also, I think you shouldn't change the entire style of her stripes, as it was agreed to be redone for the color(by most of the voters), I believe. It was asked to be redone only because it would be hard to tweak it. It's not fair for the OA when the entire pattern gets redone just because the base color is too dark.

I literally copied the pattern from a picture of an actual silver-tabby cat. There are a lot of chararts that are redone and look completely different than the original image, and what the OA had depicted. I was trying to go for realism, and use a real-life tabby design. If anyone else feels like I should redo my entire image, then say so, but no one ever said that I had to redo to match the original tabby design. The entire set of chararts were being redone anyways. 16:34 Sun Aug 2

She's silver-gray instead of silver in the first place. I thouht silver-gray cats don't have black stripes unless they're said to have them??? If realism is everything, I would nominate half of PCA's images

I think her stripe style is fine. As she said, she copied it frm an actual picture and /no one/ said that the original pattern had to be kept. That's basicaly the reason it was nominated anyways. 16:53, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shadow in the earpink and the shading on the head? :) 17:06, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten her base just a tiny bit- I think it's still too dark in places, but tweaking the base might help solve that issue. Also, the stripes are fine- no one said that keeping the stripe pattern was mandatory, therefore Splook is allowed to choose whatever pattern she so wishes.

can you lighten her base pelt a bit? i think that was a reason it was nominated too since shes supposed to be silvery i guess 18:59, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Her base is light enough, just the light needs to be defined.

I disagree- I don't think it's light enough. Given that she was asked twice to do so, I think it could use a bit of lightening up. I didn't say too much, though. Probably just a shade or two. She seems more neutral gray, when she's been said multiple times to have the same silver pelt as her mother.

Do you mind removing the small spot/stripe off the nose? Its fine if you disagree, however. Its just a preference. 03:08, August 3, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry for this to come out and if it's bothering - but can you make the pupil rounder and bigger? It's really just preference too. And perhaps make them more focused to one side? It currently looks kind of like she's looking at both sides which seems...strange but for me only. I still think the stripes should be dark gray instead of black, because she's silver-gray and not silver. If everyone still disagree with me, fine. The light should be defined anyway whether the base is light enough or not.

The eyes are fine, honestly. I make mine like that and many a times have they gotten approved- eye style is artist's choice, and just because it's not big and extravagant doesn't mean it's not acceptable. Also, Splook says that she got everything from a picture of a silver cat- there is nothing wrong with the stripe color. When I search "silver-gray cats", I get a bunch of silver tabbies.

Idk if I'm repeating anyone's comments, but can u define or darken the shading? I can't see it. 06:51, August 4, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes on the tail look too thick. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 16:15, August 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded, except for the fluffy tail. i'll do that on the next reupload, cause i have like no time to do it tonight (band camp started and im super busy), so i thought i might as well do what i can. 20:56 Tue Aug 4

Could you define the shading a bit? I don't know... It seems a little hard to see. 00:48, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Redstar (K) ~ Redone
OA is Darkfrost. If Berry or Darkfrost wants this then I will gladly surrender it 08:49, August 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink- I can't see it at all.

Re-uploaded Better? 05:52, August 7, 2015 (UTC)

Much, thank you. Also minor thing, but please crop the image to the lineart- it messes up when it's on the page. x.x (I won't count this as a comment or anything, and the 24 hours will go from your reupload, since it's way too minor to be important)

Re-uploaded 10:23, August 7, 2015 (UTC)

Stormfur (Lo) - Redone
OA was Icethroat, then I redid it. It was then redone again and subsequently tweaked again by Scarlet. All colors and texture opacity match the warrior.

Could you define the ear pink? 05:35, August 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I ran the dodge tool over it once.

Stormfur (CG) - Redone
OAs are Bracken and Sandy, with a tweak by Roo. It was redone by Paleh, and now redone by me. Again, all colors and texture opacity match the warrior.