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SkyClan and ShadowClan
You know how some cats have the Clan abbreviation after the names of their pages because there are different cats with the same name? Like Ashfur (TC) and Ashfur (SC)? Well, since ShadowClan's and SkyClan's names begin with the same letter, I suggest that the abbreviation for SkyClan be (SkC). Using the Robinwings as an example:

Robinwing (TC)

Robinwing (WC)

Robinwing (SkC)

Robinwing (RC)

Get it? I hope so XD Raven flight 92 22:49, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah that works. Anyone oppose of this?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:58, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

The reason only some of the pages have (SkC) or (ShC) is because only one or two names have cats in both Clans, such as Oakpaw. For others like Robinwing, there's no need to add an extra letter. It would add some clarification, so it's not a bad idea. It would throw me out of whack when linking for a while but if you guys think it's worth it then it's cool :)  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:39, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think we should use the 'SkC' or 'SkC' for now, since there is no Robinwing in ShadowClan or any other cats with the same name in shadowclan or skyclan. -- Icestorm Peace 14:27, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * I disagree Ice. I think that a generic system would be better as it avoids any confusion over whether 'SC' means 'ShadowClan' or 'SkyClan' for any individual cat - at the moment you need to actually go and look at the page and see which it is. I think a system that can be used for all cats no matter whether there is both a ShadowClan and SkyClan cat with that name or not would be better, with 'SkC' meaning SkyClan and 'SC' being used only for ShadowClan cats. (or 'ShC' if it's preferable; I just have in my head the abbreviations I've always used) ✐Sa  NdY  18:51, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * That sounds good to me, Sandy. I doubt we need the (ShC) because ShadowClan is more common and thus people will assume it when they see (SC). For SkyClan, which is less common, we can make the extra distinguishing factor.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:28, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Do people think we should make the change, or keep it as is?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 22:20, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Change it, in my opinion. Perseuς | Perseus ,  Thou art not the hero | Thou art not the hero  15:04, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone else? insane brick'd 02:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Can't decide. It's OK either way. Helixtalk 03:38, June 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * I still vote for changing it per my argument above. -- Sandy star 10:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree with Sandy.  E c h o  star   20:46, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

OK, I change my vote to Support, to help reaching a consensus. I see there are 5 cats to rename, so it's not a big work anyway. Kind regards, Helixtalk 17:47, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Overview
Especially for major characters, we should have an "Overview" section describing the major milestones and actions in about 10-20 paragraphs, so users unfamiliar with the character could readily see who it was and what did it do (instead of browsing through lengthy History sections listing all events without focusing on their importance). Helixtalk 09:02, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is an encyclopedia, all information is necessary for it, and I liked the history layout when I was new to Warriors. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   00:17, May 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * I did not suggest removing the History section; only adding a section that summarizes it. Helixtalk 07:27, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

That would make sense, but my only objection to it is that if a user is 'unfamiliar with the cat' they probably don't want major spoilers of everything that cat did in the course of the whole series... by sorting it by book it allows people to avoid the sections of books they haven't read and minimize spoilers for everyone while still offering comprehensive information.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:08, May 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * Yeah, that's a valid concern... Helixtalk 07:27, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

What if we put it after the history, and divide it into the Series? For example, here's how the wikicode would look. ===Overview===

In the Original Series
(overview of what the did in the Original series, if applicable)

In the New Prophecy Series
(overview of what they did in the New Prophecy, if applicable)

Would that work? → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:04, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Played around a bit, check here. The spoilered section is auto-hidden, click on Show (next to the description). However, I guess it'd overcomplicate things, and I see that not many users are interested in the feature, so we can leave it as it is for now. Helixtalk 12:22, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

That hidden section actually looks pretty nice. My only concern which does not directly affect this idea's implementation, is that we might have to discuss page layout... for major characters like Firestar the pages have a lot going on and it's less organized that I'd like it to be. But of course that separate issue doesn't have to do with this... ah I tend to ramble a lot XD  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:28, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Well, are we implementing this? Perseuς | Perseus ,  Thou art not the hero | Thou art not the hero  14:59, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know. I think it might be good for a few pages, but I want to get other people's input too. insane brick'd 21:29, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think we should keep it the way it is. An overview would just be confusing; especially if somebody wants to go through the character's history without a paticular book being spoiled for them  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:50, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I kind of agree with you to be honest. Does anyone disagree with this, and want the Overviews? insane brick'd 02:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I don't want it. It sounds very confusing to me.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  00:26, June 5, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm going to vote no on this one. I think we have enough work to do with filling in histories and fixing up the over 600 character pages without adding another huge piece of work to the list that is not strictly necessary in terms of giving any new information. I also think that the vast majority of history sections are no more than a paragraph or too per book (obviously the main characters such as Firestar are bigger than this, and POV characters have more about them, but I don't think this could be shortened by much for an overview anyway without removing important details) anyway and so it should not be too much of a problem to look through them if a person wishes to know about a character. Also, as a warriors wiki this is the one place on the internet where I've seen such history sections as we have here and I think that is what we can pride ourselves on; detail. I'm not sure that an overview section wouldn't overcomplicate the page and detract from the detailed history summaries we already work hard to produce. -- Sandy star 13:18, June 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * What Sandy says is true. Is it really necessary? We already have a section before history that explains what the character looks like. I do not believe this is necessary. However, I do believe that there should be more information about what the character is really like. Like, Berrynose is a know-it-all, and Tigerstar was evil. These are based on opinions, yes, but the opinions do not come from the readers alone. Lionblaze was the one who introduced Berrynose as a know-it-all. Tigerstar being evil is an opinion shared by many cats. Major characters and some minor characters have their personalities strongly stated throughout the series. I believe that these opinions should be stated in the beginning of the history section (if the cat's personality is strongly acknowledged and/or explained). This is my opinion. What do you think?  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  20:02, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Echostar got the idea: it would give us the opportunity to make characterizations and similar things that do not quite show from the History. On the other hand, Sandy is right as well, we have enough work to do, and anyway, there seems to be a consensus. Helixtalk 18:07, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Well I think the characterization is a separate issue than the overview. (which it does seem to be a consensus not to implement at this time...) I'd rather not have any section of characterization, either, it makes it too easy for people to put their own opinions even if there are some from the books themselves. Their personality should be shown somewhat by their actions listed in the history, and furthermore, that's why I suggested the quotes section waybackwhen - it allows bits to show that character's personality straight from the books. insane brick'd 23:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * You have a point, and indeed, the quotes are a good thing for describing a character. Thanks :) Helixtalk 06:45, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mates
I think this was briefly discussed, but overlookd. In my opinion, the article Mates should be locked so that unregistered contributers can't edit it, only warriors wiki members can. (If that's possible) I know that there are unregistered contributers who mean no harm, and some can even be quite helpful. But that page is this enormous bullseye for a vandal, if you know what I mean. What do you guys think?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:58, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, there was a discussion about this on PW talk, I think, but it's gone now, I guess it got archived due to lack of discussion.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 22:20, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

So what's your opinion about it?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:57, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

I support the idea - it was me in the first place who suggested it, but it was dropped / forgotten somehow. Helixtalk 17:35, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. One time an unregistered contributor wrote, "Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight will probably get together again", and someone wiped a whole section out. Sky wish16  Nannerpus, the banana peel 00:07, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. I've had to undo several edits there from unregistered contributors.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  00:28, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've just protected it from unregistered users and new ones. I think it's a valid point that this sort of page attracts some vandals who can be IPs. Insane; if you'd like to unprotect it, feel free, just helping out. =) --Bram ble 14:15, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I don't object to protecting it, however on the PW discussion I was not sure if we needed it separate from other pages like Queen and Nursery. However, this is not the place to talk about that. It definitely was attracting many unexperienced users and even vandalism so it's worthy of protection for now. insane brick'd 23:35, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think Mates needs to be considered a stub anymore. Should I change that?  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  14:43, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe - Silver Nomination
I'm surprised he's not already gold. :) I don't own many of the books so I may need help with the improvements.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:13, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

For such a major character, he has awfully short history for several sections, particularly some of the original series ones. Those definitely need fleshing out and he could probably use a general look over if someone has time. insane brick'd 21:29, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'd do it myself, but I don't have any of the books. If anyone would like to do it, that would be great. I mean, come on, it's Graystripe! :)-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:39, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I've been editing Graystripe for a few days, he could need some extension in the OS, but I don't know if I should do it. Sky wish16  Nannerpus, the banana peel 00:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

If you have the books, you're more than welcome too as I don't own those books.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 01:14, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wait. Do we need a citation for Tigerstar mentoring him? Quailflight 09:34, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah we should. It should be in Into the Wild.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 10:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Not just Into the Wild, but a page source, too. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:42, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Does anyone have the page? It's after Lionheart dies.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 12:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I have Into the Wild, but I can't find it. Quailflight 19:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I read Into the Wild, starting after Lionheart died all the way to the end. There's acually nothing that says Tigerclaw mentored Graypaw. There was one point when Graypaw when to a training session with Tigerclaw and Ravenpaw, but there was never an official ceremony or anything after that Night  Fall 04:42, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I was reading Fire and Ice and Bluestar said when Graystripe and Fireheart got apprentices, she told Fireheart to pass down all he learned from Tigerclaw and Lionheart. Maybe we could get a citation for that? Quailflight 14:37, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

You mean Graystripe? If so, that would work.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:51, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

No, it was Fireheart. Bluestar mentioned only Lionheart to Graystripe. But I think it would be relevant enough for Graystripe. Quailflight 19:54, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well, wasn't Graypaw's training almost complete when Lionheart died. I'll be able to check on Tuesday, since I'll be getting the Original Series then.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 15:48, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. I'm in Chapter 17 in ItW all the cats are sitting vigil for Lionheart and it says nothing about Tigerclaw taking over Graypaw's training. What do you think? Should we keep Tigerstar on or not?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:38, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

As for fleshing out the OS section, I've added more to his Rising Storm section. He's only seen at the end, but he's mentioned alot by Fireheart and Bluestar.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:06, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Battles of the Clans is missing. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 10:40, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather-Silver Nomination
I fixed up Jayfeather's page pretty good and I think it deserves at least a Silver grade. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 18:07, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sunrise section could use expansion. → •Maple  fern•  ←  21:48, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool as a mentor needs to be cited-- Night s h i n e   R  03:40, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Done. I did it. Sky wish16  Hail to the awesome WAGE! 02:35, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I'm working on cleaning up his history now. One question though, since I haven't read The Sight in a while, did Tigerstar ask Jaypaw to be trained by him before Jaypaw became a medicine cat apprentice, or after? insane brick'd 12:07, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

It was before. Page 227 was when Tigerstar and Hawkfrost approached him for the first time, and he becomes a med cat on page 243-244.<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 14:45, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, that's what i thought, thanks. I'll continue cleaning up his history. insane brick'd 16:17, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy- Silver Nomination
I think she's ready. I don't know were it mentions her having a creamy pelt though and that was one thing mentioned on the talk page. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:40, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * It looks OK for silver. I will check Sunset for the creamy pelt. Helixtalk 15:17, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * The first book we see her in as a kittypet/loner should be the citation source. -- Quailflight 09:32, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Is that Twilight? Or Starlight? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Twilight, I believe. I think in Starlight they only meet Smoky. insane brick'd 14:45, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, cools. They meet her when she is running don't they? With Berry, Mouse and Hazel, who at that time are unkown kits. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:26, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Cedarheart - Silver Nomination
He does have lots of books where he doesn't appear, but I think he looks fine. Ice fall 13:15, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree; he looks great! I think he just needs a quote or two, and then he'll be perfect. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 13:35, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Got it. He's good to go! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 13:49, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good. Comments before the vote? insane brick'd 23:43, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

The vote has been put up. insane brick'd 21:19, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Multiple references to a page
I never paid much attention to family citations, but now when I checked a few, I noticed that many different references are for the same page of the same book. Shouldn't we use the same reference number for these cases? Helixtalk 17:23, June 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree that we should. -- Sandy star 13:30, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really understand what you mean, could you elaborate? When you make a citation next to another thing, it makes a new number automatically, soo... insane brick'd 23:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Insane. Thinking about it, maybe it wouldn't be such a good idea after all - we would need to change (again) hundreds of pages, and it won't be much of an addition (only a slight aesthetics tweak), we have more important things to do I guess. :)

Kind regards, Helixtalk 06:43, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ah... I see how it would work, but I do think that with everything else that's going on it's best to keep that on the back burner for now, so to speak. (If we were to do something like this though... maybe, use that system for character-specific citations but then make templates like that for common citations such as shared family ones. Just a thought :P) insane  brick'd 21:19, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

This has already been done on Ferncloud's tree, and I agree with using it. It makes the citations less cluttered, especially on characters like Firestar where there's tons of them. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 01:36, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Petalfur- Silver Nomination
I've worked on her page and I think it's ready. I've cleaned up her Omen of The Stars section and thats all that is really neaded. Any citations needed? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:54, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Great job with the article! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:30, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, but I think a little more detail could be added to her TFA section, seeing as it was (and probably will stay) her only notable appearance, so it's worth fleshing out as much is possible :) insane  brick'd 23:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I don't have TFA, I'll get Misty to give it to me at school. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:02, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Adderpaw- Silver Nomination
I think he's ready. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:29, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. His history is good.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  18:59, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, he looks good. Comments before the vote? insane brick'd 23:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

His vote is up now. insane brick'd 21:19, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf - Silver Nomination
She looks ready. → •Maple  fern•  ←  21:13, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf's history could be expanded quite a bit, especially in The Sight. I don't think she's quite ready.

 E c h o  star   13:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lionheart - Silver Nomination
I would like to nominate Lionheart's article. It looks OK for silver; his images should be renamed though. Helixtalk 05:09, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The Bluestar's Prophecy section could be expanded dramatically.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:56, June 9, 2010 (UTC)


 * Can someone help with that? I do not have the book. Helixtalk 21:07, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost - Gold Nomination
Hawkfrost's article looks complete to me, there is really nothing more to add, and it was / is featured. Helixtalk 05:10, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, he looks pretty good. I don't see any significant problems - does anyone else? insane brick'd 23:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

No. Quailflight  09:40, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

The Twilight section seems a bit short. This might not be true, but I don't have the book, so... yeah.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:31, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Speckletail - Silver Nomination
Her citations are complete and history expanded. I think she's ready for silver. -- Sandy star 10:41, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, definitely. Her history is very good. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:20, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The New Prophecy sections should be expanded, if any more information can be found-- Night s h i n e   R  05:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * I will expand it in the coming days, when I'll have some time for it. Helixtalk 14:55, June 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * As nominator I will get to this, promise, but it won't be until the weekend at the earliest most likely. I'm not sure she had much of role in TNP but I will have a good look. --  Sandy star 15:38, June 16, 2010 (UTC)


 * Hey, I promised first! ;) I can leave it for you, but only if you really want it; you know that I love to help out. Helixtalk 18:18, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Skywatcher- Silver Nomination
Skywatcher's article is outstanding, especially the Firestar's Quest section. I think he's ready.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  12:06, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. I think he's ready. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:21, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

His Firestar's Quest section looks a bit too expanded. That could be fixed. Icefall Icy Winds 13:36, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Ice. Condense that section and update the family tree-- Night s h i n e   R  00:30, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, he's detailed. I think he looks good enough.. insane brick'd 23:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my goshness his Firestar's Quest section...wow <font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 04:26, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no... did I make him too detailed???  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:28, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

It could be toned down a bit... OMG...You killed It!  12:48, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Amberclaw- Silver Nomination
I hope I'm allowed to do this. XD -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:26, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

First of all, split 'em up. They don't have any connection to each other. → •Maple  fern•  ←  12:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, split 'em up. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

He looks pretty good. Anyone have any concerns? insane brick'd 21:24, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'm satisfied.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:30, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Antpelt- Silver Nomination
He only appears in one book, but I think he's ready. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

He looks fine. Any comments? insane brick'd 21:24, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good to me.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:33, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Archeye- Silver Nomination
I think his information is good. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, no problems there. Any comments before the vote? insane brick'd 21:24, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Going up for vote. → •Maple  fern•  ←  01:26, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Barkface - Silver Nomination
His article looks ready-- Night s h i n e   R  16:33, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think some parts of his history could be added, I don't think he is quite ready. Also he needs some quotes, I'll find some. Whitestorm17 18:36, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

The sections where all that is said is something like "Barkface is seen at the Moonpool" can probably be expanded. I don't think that he's quite ready.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:35, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I meant what Echo said. Whitestorm17 20:52, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Ceremony template
Just a short note to avoid any communication problems - with Insane's idea, I created a template to put Warrior (and possibly other) Ceremonies on Character pages. Please tell me if it's OK, or do you have other suggestions for it. I might reduce the font size, so it won't take up so much space on the pages. Kind regards, Helixtalk 22:41, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is great Helix! But, we have another kind of ceremony template somewhere, but this one looks easy and simple to use Quailflight  11:31, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Template:Warrior Ceremony is the template. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 04:19, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes I know, but then I offered to Insane to create a more flexible one (can be used for all ceremonies, and up to 15 quotes with 3 speakers), Template:Ceremony, and she gave it a green light. Of course, if members prefer the first one, we can scrap this; your choice. :) Helixtalk 17:52, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Well, no offence to Goldenpaw, but I prefer this one. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 10:06, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lowbranch and Twig - Silver Nominations
I fixed their family tree so now everything looks fine to me-- Night s h i n e   R  00:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. I did a quick fix of Twig's article, and now it's complete. Both are ready.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:38, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Snowbird - Silver Nomination
Her article is good-- Night s h i n e   R  21:34, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. For such a minor character, I think she's good. I fixed some spelling mistakes<font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 04:24, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think we should add some quotes, I know she doesn'tsay much but there is something we could put down for her from either Eclipse or Outcast. Sadly, I can't because I have loaned my copies out to my cousin. Could someone check it out? Thanks! Whitestorm17 18:33, June 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'll see whether she really has any good ones.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼ 

13:44, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Echo! Whitestorm17 20:54, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Morningstar - Silver Nomination
Morningstar's article looks perfect to me-- Night s h i n e   R  22:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think we should give him a quote or two. I'll see if I can get to that this week. =D -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 17:50, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Is a quote really nessicary?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:42, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's not neccessary but it makes the article a lot better. I agree with Honeyfur, she should have a quote. Whitestorm17 20:48, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I added a quote-- Night s h i n e   R  21:09, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Cite Songbird as a mate. → •Maple  fern•  ←  02:16, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Done-- Night s h i n e   R  03:10, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudtail- Gold Nomination
I cleaned up a litte with his history and added some refrences. I think he is ready. --Whitestorm17 12:08, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think we need more details on the Darkest Hour and some other books, but otherwise he's ok. <font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 01:21, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

He can't be Gold, since he was never featured. Icefall Icy Winds 01:33, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Whitestorm. Maybe we can feature him in July. Quailflight 09:38, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Quailflight. Cloudtail's article is pretty good, though.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:45, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Ooops! I forgot to chek about being featured. Yes, I hope he can be featured soon. Whitestorm17 20:50, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Lichen-Silver Nomination
Yay! My first nomination! I think she looks good. <font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 01:19, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Details about Sharpclaw and Firestar telling her about the meeting need to be added, but otherwise she's okay.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:47, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Before-
I think instead of 'Before Into the Wild' shouldn't it be 'Before Bluestar's Prophecy' Raffyjack123 20:35, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

But couldn't something be in between the two?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Bluestar's Prophecy ends during Into the Wild, as one of the last chapters takes place during Into the Wild's prologue. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 20:25, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Absence
I won't be active for the next three weeks because I will be on a family vacation. I hope this will explain my absence. Thanks, Moon  eh  02:25, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Voting
I have a concern about voting. I believe that we should have a set number of people who have to vote for the character, like 5 or so, because some characters, when I looked back at some slightly earlier voting, only had 2-4 users who voted. One, Shrewpaw, had only 2 voters, and one of those voters was the user who nominated them. So I am very concerned that the voting doesn't truly represent the users in Project Characters. Please think carefully about my concern. Thanks,  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  14:03, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think Echostar has a point. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   01:19, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

To be honest I don't think it matters. Would any of the people who didn't vote really object to the article being silver anyways? If it gets through the initial nomination on this talk page and people think it's okay, the voting is kinda just a formality. Besides, it could be worse. insane brick'd 02:04, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hayberry, Wildkit, and Minnowkit - Silver Nomination
I added citations and fixed a few links and sentences. They look good!-- Night s h i n e   R  03:03, June 17, 2010 (UTC)