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Reedwhisker (Rogue) ~ For Approval
very filthy repost, I apologize if I break a rule or anything for this --

Not sure if you are or not, but if not, smooth the shading and define the light. 04:48, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

You aren't breaking a rule, Neon. We do not tell users they cannot repost unless they break the one month rule.

Define the ear pink? 20:20, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried lightening it to contrast against his black fur, so it'd pop out and be more visible --

Does the ear pink match the other images? The pink in the deputy looks lighter than this. 14:56, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the image?

Re-uploaded I think it's the light? Also, how do I define it, Spooky? I forgot. --

I don't know how other people do it, but I just erase shading where I want my light-source to be with low opacity set in the eraser, then I smudge/blur it. That might work? -- 20:44, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded did it work??? --

Smooth the shading on the tail? 21:12, 5/05/2017

Re-uploaded --

Smoothen out all the shading, but especially on the head. 06:17, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --

There's a speck of waste by the booty 12:55, 5/08/2017

Re-uploaded I found that funnier than I probably should, Snow. --

Lmaoo, can you define the eye depth as well as the light in the eye? 21:51, 5/09/2017

And smooth the head shading a little more and define the light on the back paw/leg farthest from us? 23:39, 5/09/2017

Re-uploaded Fact: I turn my dark cats a dark red when fixing their shading to see it better, and I nearly uploaded red Reedwhisker oml --

Define the light on both the farthest legs. 02:36, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --

The earpink looks a purplish compared to the other images - unless that's because of your shading tint, then you can disregard this. But it really does look purple imo

Pretty sure it's the blue shading tint -- I turned my shading layers off, compared the earpink to some from the deputy, and found they were the same hex code. --

Earpink does give a purple tint under blue shading or anything really *whispers* color theoryyyy But anyway smooth the flank shading a little more? 01:26, 5/12/2017

Strong Pounce (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay let's try this again shall we? —  Minkclaw   13:28, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg farthest from us? Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, May 4, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Re-Ups —  Minkclaw   19:17, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little, and expand the light on the chest. 20:44, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste on the right side of the image and by the paws. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light to < front leg 14:32, 5/06/2017

Define the tail shading 14:39, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any earpink?

Still working? 22:53, 5/08/2017

Yes, it hasn't been a week yet. Yes there is ear shading, usually a cat's ear shading with be close to that of the base pelt or the color of their ears. I'll have it uploaded tomorrow. —  Minkclaw   19:52, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Mink, we ask if you're still working after 4 days, and no one asked if there was any ear shading??? 23:45, 5/09/2017

Winter I think they meant ear pink, not ear shading. 01:04, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I did my apologies and I was aware it was a week, that's what I was always told? —  Minkclaw   13:09, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Its declined after a week, but we ask after 4 days.. 13:23, 5/10/2017

Ah well my apologies then. —  Minkclaw   16:22, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   19:08, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink, I'm having trouble seeing it. Branchwing (talk) 21:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, define the light on the < leg. This needs to have dark brown ears, as as far as I can see, it's just earpink that's leaking around the ear. Get rid of some shading on the chest and add some shading along the base of the neck/chin, and define the eye depth 01:28, 5/12/2017

Also maybe smoothen out the ear pink too 01:34, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Deerpaw (TC) (Star)- For evaluation
KatsCandy (talk) 08:37, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

My first helpful hint is to not align your images - as it can mess with the page's formatting. Second, this should be called File:Deerpaw (TC).star.png and there is a fair bit of waste around the image. I would also perhaps recommend getting in contact with the artist of the image you are matching for the file so that everything can match spot on. ^^ 08:41 Fri May 5 2017

Can you clear backround? – 10:15, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the spots, also can you add around Deerpaw (TC) so we can get a link to her page? --

She is long-furred, like charart of appretince – 11:00, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Hey yeah I'm the OA of the apprentice. I used pure white speckles and smudged each slightly, and there's also texture on the other image. The earpink seems off in color, and also, define the eye depth a tad. If you need the file for it, shoot a message on my talk page

Still working? 12:55, 5/09/2017

Yes I will reupload the edited version soon KatsCandy (talk) 04:01, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. 21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink 01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray 16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Theres waste by the butt 13:45, 5/09/2017

Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--  22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one

Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall <span style="">23:50, 5/09/2017

Reups --  20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images.

Reups --  02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place <span style="">02:43, 5/11/2017

Is there chest shading? If not, add some. 02:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define flank shading? Nice. :3 03:22, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  04:02, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The placement of the gray doesn't match completely. Especially check the warrior image, as you can see the difference between the shades better there, and also how there's a more defined patch of gray on the face.

Define the shading more <span style="">01:29, 5/12/2017

Leafstar (Alt W.) ~ For Approval
how does one charart 21:12, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the texture a lit'l, and soften the white?

I think the shading is leaking by the belly on the curve of the hind leg <span style="">16:04, 5/07/2017

reuploaded the homework is threatening to drown me why did i leave it until now 23:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white patches? 23:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:23, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to brighten the patches more (try removing the brown on it), and give them a good blur/smudge, they look a little chalky.

Um, I don't think you can really brighten white guys? But maybe smooth the shading and lighten it just a smidge? Maybe that's why everyone's saying to lighten 'em^ <span style="">02:34, 5/09/2017

Yeah it is possible, Broken. I usually duplicate the layer the white is on and adjust the opacity until I get the desired brightness. I'm sure there are other ways, but that's how I normally do it. 03:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Or the dodge tool. :) Is it just me or is the muzzle darker than the rest of the image? Is that shading? 03:59, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the tabby pattern? I think she's meant to have tabby stripes anyway 21:36, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded defined + blurred white patches, got rid of the darker muzzle, and redid the tabby pattern with a thicker brush 21:55, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs and the tail, and define the light on the legs after you define the shading. The shading is also leaking on the < ear, and possibly remove the shading on the front of the chest, as that wouldn't be there in your source. The shading is also leaking along the back of the neck and the back itself, smooth the patch of white on the base of the tail and brighten the white more, it's looking like a milky-cream/white <span style="">23:52, 5/09/2017

Give the stripes more variation and make them curve around the body rather than just flat lines.

reuploaded 00:51, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a little bit, or at least add some depth. 01:56, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I think you missed a patch of shading on the bum by the base of the tail <span style="">02:44, 5/11/2017

Talonpaw (A) - For Approval
Here we go! --Mustetassu (talk) 09:47, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

This is very good for a first image! This isn't reserved on the table though, so that might be a problem <span style="">09:49, 5/07/2017

Ah, I'm sorry! This is my first time doing this so I'm still learning :') Should I reserve it now or is it too late for that? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 09:55, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Yes, from my knowledge, everyone gets one free pass :)

Alright, I reserved it now! Thanks for the help! :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 10:15, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

i don't think you did, your name's not on the table.

Soften the stripes? I'm so tired I can barely see properly, but expand thr shadng too? The place where you reserve stuff is called http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki:Charart ...I'm gping to sleep now.. <span style="">11:10, 5/07/2017

Aaaa I'm so sorry, I misunderstood! ;___; Now my name is in there. I edited earlier this (http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki:Charart/List) page where I stroke Talonpaw's file from the list. Did I do wrong, or was that meant to be done as well? I'm sorry for messing up like this ;w;' --Official HamilTrash (talk) 11:13, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Silver tabbies should have black stripes; that's what we've done for those who are called just silver, which applies in this case.

Re-uploaded. How does it look now? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 11:35, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

This should be File:Talonpaw.apprentice.png not Apprentice. Can you define the shading depth? <span style="">13:10, 5/07/2017

if it's possible, can you define the white paws? this is nice. 16:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I added the changes requested above, how is it now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:10, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Removed alignment. Don't put "|left" Just click on the photo and hit "more info" and then click on "upload new version" <span style="">17:13, 5/07/2017

Smoothen out the white paws into the silver and maybe make the earpink less neon, and smoothen it out too? 17:17, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth 17:21, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Got it, thanks for the tip Broken_Foot! I added the requested changes above, it was a bit difficult to define the eye depth when the apprentice's eyes are so small but I tried my best. How is it now? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:28, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I don't see changes for the earpink and white paws. Smoothen out the white paws a bit more, and all of the shading. 17:30, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Your welcome :) The image is coming along great! Here's some earpink codes that you might like: 9a3b3b\b28891\e1a7a7 <span style="">17:34, 5/07/2017

Re-uploaded. How is it now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe darken the silver a bit to make it more clear that the front paws are white? Right now they look like the same color as the rest of the kitty

Re-uploaded. I darkened the silver a bit, how does it look now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 03:30, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you make the nose pink less purple-ish? 03:45, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed it! :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 03:53, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the legs, shoulder, and tail areas? It seems like there's too little <span style="">13:04, 5/08/2017

Imo, I think the stripes look more dark gray than black. I keep looking at Shiningheart, Reed Tail, and other silver tabbies and the stripes here don't look dark enough to be black. Darken them more? 16:58, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

I think this is the range of images that the shading tint makes it look a completely different color that throws off the image, and this seems to be the case. I know shading tint is artists choice but can you make it something other than a light blue? <span style="">18:34, 5/08/2017

I don't see how it's throwing it off at all. if anything the base just needs to be lightened a bit more, since it looks a bit more pale grey than silver. 18:39, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

To me with the shading it kinda looks like a pale blue gray color <span style="">20:39, 5/08/2017

Gonna have to agree with Snow on this one^ It does seem like it's pale blue <span style="">01:26, 5/09/2017

The shading was fine until they darkened the base. So, if they just lighten the base again, it should fix the problem. 03:50, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Drizzle (W) ~ CBA
I may need to define texture

Yeah, you probalby should. Also,smudge the gray some more. 23:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded tomorrow I'll try to make earpink match better

Would you like the file for the kit? <span style="">03:15, 5/08/2017

Some things: the white that is in that stripe down the middle should widen out as ii goes --> way a little more, like on the kit image. It should also be a little wider in proportion on the leg part as well, because of how wide it seems on the ES, and the kit blank is pretty small so it would account to that. The ES image (I'm fairly sure) shows 4 white paws. The second gray stripe on the tail shouldn't go all the way across - as seen on both other images, and also, I think the white chest dips down a teensy bit too dar. Then, the facial white has a bit more of a defined shape - and it'd stretch in a thinner part a few more pixels on the forehead, like the others. Also you might want to double check if there can be those three white spots as shown on the lower half of the body. Ik it's from differing angles, but the one nearer to the leg wouldn't because of the ES, and the one <-- way isn't visible on the kit, unless it's hidden by shading, idk. Sorry for the long comment

Also the white and the texture should be a lot smoother to match the kit, as it was the first in the set. Also define the texture on the white. <span style="">12:48, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded Alrighty so I widened the white on the front leg and flank, fixed the tail, I tried to define the shape of the white on the face, receded white chest a bit, smoothed white and texture, now the things I have issues with: So about the back paws, I didn't make them white because on the Early Settler it's showing the other sides of the paws and they aren't solid white, they just have little white spots, I didn't want to stretch the white on the forehead because on the kit it barely shows it going above the eyes. Then the white spots I added, I don't think any of the spots I added are visible on the kit or the Early Settler, but the kit blank is tiny and weird so maybe I'm wrong. I'll define texture on the white later, after I get the file

The back paw closest to us gets white on it, according to the kit image. <span style="">20:49, 5/08/2017

Also in regards to the es image, it looks like the oa has white on both paws, but it doesnt look like the whole paw because of the leg shading on the other leg. So in that case, white is needed on both paws <span style="">20:51, 5/08/2017 '''

Reuploaded

Smooth shading on the haunch a little? <span style="">13:30, 5/10/2017

Reuploaded

I really like this, you did a fantastic job. Comments before approval? 12:42, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Seedpelt (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
ErmineGlow (talk) 00:02, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups got rid of some waste. ErmineGlow (talk) 00:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define the shading depth some. 00:14, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth 00:36, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle shading. 01:13, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the tail, and it looks like you erased some of the lineart around the whiskers, paws, chin, and tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 02:41, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more. It should be more of a gradient. 11:14, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

You have very odd smudges in your shading that conflict with the pattern, mind fixing that? <span style="">12:49, 5/08/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:02, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups For some reason the changes to the shading didn't appear, so I tried again. Me thinks it is better now. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:05, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">21:06, 5/08/2017

Reups Me terrible at shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a lot 21:52, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Ermine, what tool are you using for smoothing the shading? Because it kind of looks like the burn tool, and that's not a good tool to use. If you have a watercolor tool, I'd advise using that, or a blur tool in general. Are you using a mouse or a tablet? <span style="">23:03, 5/08/2017

I used the paint tool for the darkest part of the shading that follows the lineart, then the lighter parts were made by either the paint tool on a low opacity or the burn tool. I am using a mouse. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:55, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

The burn tool is mostly good for making shading, not smoothing it. Also, there's a patch of shading missing on the ---> paw, sorry if that was said already. 03:03, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Recede the white on the cheek. On the warrior, the white is lower below the eye so there's more brown space there than on here. Also, I think the white above the nose should be smudged a bit more upwards to match the warrior  03:40, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:09, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste on the upper part of the tail. --

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:17, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a lot more, it's all over the place. And define the light on the legs <span style="">23:54, 5/09/2017

Define the light everywhere actually 02:05, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the face, it seems in shadow. --Streamdapple (talk) 10:47, May 10, 2017 (UTC)Streamdapple

Also, can you smooth out the shading overall, especially the body? Also, what program is this, again? --

Btw this should be for evaluation, as you never had an image approved <span style="">13:32, 5/10/2017

Getting an image approved is not the requirement. Knowing the basics is. The heading will stay at for approval.

Reups I used the blur and smudge tool to try and smooth out the shading, and Neon, I am using Pixlr ErmineGlow (talk) 21:09, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you try Gaussian blurring? It is your choice, I suppose, but it would make the shading more realistic. Just make a new layer, paint over where you want to shade. Then go to the tab "Filter" and select Gaussian Blur. Choose your blurring rate and you're done. --  22:26, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Not sure if it looks any different ErmineGlow (talk) 22:42, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading some more. Branchwing (talk) 01:19, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Gussian blurring on shading does not work. You have to use the regular blur tool and set it to whichever rate suits you best. And using the burn tool doesn't work either. Ermine, does the program you're using have a blur tool? <span style="">03:28, 5/11/2017

Yeah,it does. Tomorrow when I get to reuploading I can try it. ErmineGlow (talk) 03:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Broken, gaussian blur does work, you just have to know how to use it :/ <span style="">04:12, 5/11/2017

Reups I tried usin the blur tool. ErmineGlow (talk) 13:00, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I can see tons of blurred lineart and some | dark spots in the shading, can you fix that? --

Could you define the ear pink on the right ear(-->) KatsCandy (talk) 23:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Your vvcap didn't work, Neon ErmineGlow (talk) 00:22, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more and define the light on the head and legs <span style="">01:31, 5/12/2017

Bubbling Stream (W) - CBA
She looks so much better with the ES blank :| All layers/colors from the other images. <span style="">00:18 Mon May 8

Can you smooth out that one spot on the tail tip? (unless you'd rather not because it's part of your style)

Define the ear pink 02:33, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Looks like the yellow is a little darker than on the Early Settler

Sun got the colors from the other images though? Given that she's also the OA of the kit and early settler, I would think that Sun got the colors directly from the other files. (not the alt, the regular ES)

Everything matches perfectly though? I cannot mess with the ear pink. This is the exact color and way it was smudged as the other images. And even the opacity on all the layers is the exact same, so there is no difference. The only difference is light source. <span style="">12:45 Mon May 8

Can you smooth the shading a little tiny bit on the legs/paws? <span style="">13:08, 5/08/2017

I did it, just haven't had the internet access to email it to my phone so I can upload. Things are really rough again in my life. I'm sorry I haven't gotten around to it. 😞 <span style="">20:56 Wed May 10

Reuploaded I really just want bad things to stop happening... <span style="">00:20 Fri May 12

-patpat- CBA? <span style="">01:32, 5/12/2017

Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading <span style="">13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more <span style="">18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please <span style="">01:32, 5/12/2017

Clover (ES) (W) ~ CBA
moustache kitty. 23:39, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the front leg shading a bit? I love this lol Rainbowmistake (talk) 23:53, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Um, I can see the shading on both the front legs just fine? <span style="">02:02, 5/10/2017

I mostly meant the farthest front paw Rainbowmistake (talk) 02:53, May 10, 2017 (UTC)chat

reuploaded 02:59, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I love your chararts so much :^O Smooth that line of muzzle shading just a tad? 03:22, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

If you can, define the ear pink a bit. Broken, please don't say "it's fine." :/ 04:18, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded you're probably the only one who does lul 16:45, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 12:41, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Flower (Ro) - CBA
07:01, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth shading a little on the main body? <span style="">13:33, 5/10/2017

Re-uploaded 21:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink 22:30, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:29, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">01:33, 5/12/2017

Pink Eyes (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 18:00, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? Also, I'm sure the other images have texture. Cute^ <span style="">18:03, 5/10/2017

Reuploaded. I'm going to hold off on the texture, as I can't tell if it is actually texture or just the shading; If it's the latter, I'm not required to match it. 18:19, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

it looks like texture to me. 18:20, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Its texture. Also Bluestar, why did you change Brokens reservation??? That is a big no-no.. :/ im going to have to ask skye about this. <span style="">18:25, 5/10/2017

Reuploaded. Like I said, it was an accident. I didn't realize editing from the view changes page would revert any edits made in between. I know it now, so I won't do it again. 18:33, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth on the lower part of the haunch/backside?

Reuploaded. 22:15, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and define the light on the hind legs. 23:29, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the flank shading 23:30, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:40, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck/face. 02:01, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

CAn you lessen some of the shading on the neck/muzzle area? <span style="">02:30, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded. I used this exact same amount of head shading on Robinwing's warrior image, so I'd rather not if I don't have to. If others agree, though, I'll change it. 02:38, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I love this. Maybe define the shading on the front legs a bit? (Im sorry if this is nitpicky, I use google translate for my comments) Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Reuploaded. 17:12, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

defint the belly shading, the tail shading, and the light on the front legs. 18:42, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:54, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the shading depth could be defined some more near the butt <span style="">20:18, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded. 20:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The shading darkness doesn't match everywhere else as dark as it is on the booty, can you lighten that part please? <span style="">01:33, 5/12/2017

Gooseberry (W) ~ For Approval
I tried... 19:34, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I wasn't sure if it was shading or not, but on the queen, isn't there texture? This is very nice <span style="">19:38, 5/10/2017

I don't think it's texture?? Idk. Maybe define the ear pink and define the shading on both farthest legs. 22:29, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's no texture =) but I think the stripes could be softer and more broken up, so try smudging it a bit more? This is so adorabbb <3333

Reups 23:31, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tiny bit more? <span style="">01:34, 5/12/2017

Reed Tail (W) - CBA
I love doing his pictures 19:55, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth just a smidge? Pretty! <span style="">20:11, 5/10/2017

Re-ups Thanks! 10:37, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? awesome job c:

Wishkit (Kit) - CBA
I did like 3 chararts while my boy leafy was being approved, but I like this one the best. All colors from other images, and I tried my best to match the stripes with this position. 20:20, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ear pink's a tad lighter on the other image - it's just under shading there, but this looks darker overall than the earpink on the star's --> ear. Also, I think there'd be a smidge of shading here on the <-- side with your source, just so that whole side isn't flat.

reups Is this looking more like the star's ear pink? 20:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

The nose and earpink hex are a76d52, if you need that. Nice job Danny!

reups Thank you! (Okay, the ear pink should now be absolutely 100% accurate) 23:29, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

pretty :) CBA?

Eagle Feather (W) - For Approval
These blanks are a little smaller than I'm use to 21:34 10 May 2017

Define the shading depth 21:47, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad, and also I can see you know what you're doing, so this can be 'For Approval'.

Define the ear pink a bit?

Reuploaded 20:25 11 May 2017

Smooth out the shading some more? <span style="">20:52, 5/11/2017

Define the light on the back leg farthest from us? <span style="">01:35, 5/12/2017

Pricklekit (WC) (Ki) - For Evalution
My first image posted here... Hope you like it! Branchwing (talk) 22:23, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, define the shading depth, this needs a black tipped nose, define the light on the ---> front leg. Nice! 22:28, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think the black-tipped nose would be visible on this blank, as assuming that it's on the bridge of the nose is an assumption, and we don't make those here. <span style="">22:52, 5/10/2017

no it's not? dew nose has the exact same thing except with white. 23:33, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added the black tipped nose, considering the comment about Dew Nose. Also made her nose a little lighter to differentiate the tipped nose and the actual nose a little bit better, they would have been nearly the same color if I didn't. Hopefully I defined the shading enough. Branchwing (talk) 00:41, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! :) Smooth out shading depth a tad? 00:48, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the shading just a little bit? <span style="">04:52, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 21:37, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading again 01:28, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading itself is rather okay, but feel free to do so anyway. Define shading depth as well? <span style="">01:36, 5/12/2017

Mosspaw (SC)(Ki) ~ CBA
This is the first time trying out smudged shading. Ugly. This was a really quick job because I was very busy today. Wanted to do something basic, and was dying to do a kit <span style="">23:54, 5/10/2017

Ik it's a different angle, but at least a few pixels of that brown tail patch we see on the star should be visible.

I don't think it would be. I made the brown patch so it would be at an angle, and I'm pretty sure it wouldn't be visible on this blank's angle. But if others do agree I'll change it <span style="">00:04, 5/11/2017

I see your perspective, but it looks as if the patch curves under the tail, so I believe a tiny bit would be visible on the underside of the tail. Also, smooth the head shading a tad. 00:06, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I know the pixels aren't that prominent, but as said above, I only added a little bit of pixels. Also, I know the brown looks green-brown, because that was when I didn't know it did(on the star). So don't comment about that, please. <span style="">00:11, 5/11/2017

Where is the brown there, though? As seen in your latest upload from up close, there is pure white on the bottom of the tail, unless I'm being really really dumb here, you didn't add any brown there.

I added the brown. I don't want it to be very prominent because personally, I don't think it would be visible. The brown is there, but it just blends in with the shading a wee bit because I only added about 3-4 pixels and smudged them lightly :/ <span style="">00:33, 5/11/2017

No like, I meant the underside of the tail. There isn't shading on the underside of the tail. As you can see on the screencap, the brown needs to be on the underside of the tail, not the topside like you have it. That's what I'm referring to, as you can see the underside is /very/ clearly white.

Re-uploaded! I need to pay attention more <span style="">01:47, 5/11/2017

Can you...define that it's part of the pattern and brown? It just looks like an odd patch of shading to me <span style="">02:29, 5/11/2017

Re-uploaded! I tried <span style="">02:55, 5/11/2017

For smudged shading I suggest you use a very small hard edged brush because right now your shading is somewhat blotchy

Re-uploaded! I just blurred it <span style="">03:23, 5/11/2017

CBA? <span style="">01:36, 5/12/2017

Snail Shell (W) ~ For Approval
I took the colors from the es version I did, back when that was in use

As I said when the ES was up, the pattern is more flecked-like than you have it. I based his kit image off of Ashfur, and this really doesn't match all too well. I know it's a small blank, but... idk. They're meant to be small, round ones. These are way too big.

Reuploaded I hope this is better; not seeing the Ashfur resemblance other than the coloring, so I just redid the pattern and hope it looks better

Smooth the shading a little bit on the back legs, and define it a tad more on the front leg farthest from us. Also smooth the shading a little on the neck/back area where it's kind of by the shoulder <span style="">01:37, 5/12/2017

Jessamy (Q) ~ For Approval
03:37, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading 03:39, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:42, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the splotch on her ear? Unless this is a different cat x3 <span style="">04:18, 5/11/2017

Also, mind defining the shading depth on the face? <span style="">05:00, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded 05:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I think there'd be a little shoulder shading, like above the < front leg extending up to that shoulder blade. It doesn't have to be very much (though some people choose to extend it further, but that's more of a preference), but I think it looks a little flat there and that might help. Or at least a little behind the head, as the head would be blocking some of the light from hitting just there.

Reuploaded I added some behind the head. 19:29, May 11, 2017 (UTC) Reuploaded a few times for waste and stuff. 19:34, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? Also I don't think < ear would have any light in the earpink area <span style="">01:38, 5/12/2017

Reuploaded 01:51, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Wildkit (Ki) - For Approval
I figure since the tail is an extension of the spine, then maybe I could have the black markings on the tail as well? Meh, if it's not okay, I'll just remove them.

I don't think there would be any splotches on the tail, because it wasn't specified I don't think. Other then that, this is very pretty! <span style="">04:51, 5/11/2017

Re-uploaded. Well, as I said, the tail is an extension of the spine, but meh. Just wanted to try and see if I could sneak it in here.

Smooth out the shading on the paws and flank? <span style="">20:22, 5/11/2017

Oh look. New recruit to Jayce's kit army. Kek. Define shading depth round his throat? --

Define the shading depth a tiny tiny bit more around the tail <span style="">01:39, 5/12/2017

Storm Pelt (W) - For Approval
shading cats with splotchy pelts is hard; all colors from his other images. 14:13, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and scars, as I can hardly see them. Also, add the torn eartip. 17:05, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I remember adding that torn ear, I must have undone it. 19:59, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I know the colors are all from his other images, but maybe define the earpink just a tad? <span style="">20:16, 5/11/2017

he looks too dark comapred to his other images. I don't know if it's the shading or what. 20:32, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Could you thicken the lineart around the torn ear? And maybe lighten the color of the scars to match the ES better?

I don't see why Patch has to thicken the lineart around the ear? <span style="">21:36, 5/11/2017

There's waste outside the torn ear 21:39, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I went ahead and thickened the lineart a bit, defined the earpink and scars, and lightened his base color just a tad. 22:55, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking a little bit on the back leg furthest from us? And also, I know the light's coming from behind but I think the two farthest from us paws/legs would have some light on them on the very tops of their paws or something. Kind of like Sunjaw's image above if that helps explain better <span style="">01:40, 5/12/2017

Slash (L) ~ For Approval
...woW <span style="">01:18, 5/12/2017

Loki (Ro) ~ For Approval
I dunno if the shading's too dark, because my monitor won't let me see it properly.

You need the hex codes for the fur, eyes or earpink at all? <span style="">01:28, 5/12/2017

Minor, but the nose should be a very dark red. 01:29, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Here's the hex code for the nose: 0d0504 Here's for the earpink:ab4538 And here's for the eyes: 9cff00 (shading tint is optional but here: 6f4dff) <span style="">01:34, 5/12/2017

Smooth the earpink a little more, shading is leaking on the belly by the back leg's bend, and define the shading on the front leg farthest from us <span style="">01:41, 5/12/2017

Spider Paw (W) - For Approval
I didn't add the extra toe because on the Early Settler, it's on the side that's not showing, but I can add it. 01:48, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smoothed out shading. 01:53, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Smooth the shading just a tad more and define the light a little. 01:57, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you try to add it in? Just a little bump on his other foot would be ok <span style="">01:59, 5/12/2017