Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Waspwhisker (KP) - Tweaked
Darkened and defined shading. OA was DJ. Commentos? 21:49, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit please. 15:11, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  21:05, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it a little and maybe make the shoulder and back highlights connect to fit the light source better? 04:37, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 04:28, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading between and on the legs and on the tail. 21:36, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading a bit. 22:41, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (A) ~ Tweaked
Made her dark ginger. Now bask in it's glory failness :P OA was Shelly. 16:41, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shush, not failness. De-saturate her a bit more. 17:55, 16, 09, 2012

Reuploaded Why thank ya :3 De-saturated her, hope it matches more now. 20:05, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and desaturate her more. 20:37, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes made. 00:15, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

This might just be my computer screen, but the shading kinda clouds around her eye so you can't see it. Can you fix it?-- 20:22, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it looks a bit dark to me, but not enough that I wouldn't be able to see the eyes. I think it is fine in my opinion, but if someone else agrees, I'll do it. 21:57, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the shading some. ~01:16, 22, 09, 2012~

Boulderfur (W) -Tweaked
OA was me. I defined the shading. Changes may not be showing. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:55, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of dat waste. 21:00, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the shading. 21:31, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:38, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Waste. 23:19, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 01:47, September 18, 2012 (UThttp://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki_talk:Charart/Tweak_Page?action=edit&section=8C)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:25, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

They are for me. There's still waste, and define the shading a tad more. 02:41, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is as dark as it can go without looking awkward. And where's the waste? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:46, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

In between the haunch and the leg, and the eyes look darker than the apprentices'.(Though the eyes could just me me.) =3 02:52, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

In between the haunch and leg is where the shading is. There's a highlight on the apprentice's belly because the light source is underneath the cat. That is my shading placement choice and I'll be reluctant to change it. The eyes just have more highlights and dark spots than the apprentices (I played with them to give them more depth) but I can change them... if the majority wants me to. I'm fond of them. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:37, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Duck means there's waste in the spot in between the legs. It's not supposed to be there, so please get rid of it. It doesn't matter what the source is, that waste shouldn't be there. And speaking of sources, this isn't a proper light source. Could you possibly change it?

Can you blend the shading a little more? And it is, Duck just has two conflicting areas of origin, on the shoulders, arm, and haunch, it suggests a lower light, but on the face, it suggests a light higher up. It's an easy fix, on the haunch, curve the shading on the underside of the haunch more, and on the arm, define the shading on the backs and shadow the bottom of the paw. 05:57, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There is a little waste around the head, blur the shading a touch more, and even out around the hips. 10:01, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ohh.... oh, sorry, I read it wrong. Sorry, sorry, I thought he was talking abot darkening the shading. I am sooo sorry, duck! I hope you forgive me ;.; Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:39, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by the head,chin and (his) right ear. 23:45, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and define the depth of the shading, 'cause it looks somewhat flat. Btw this is stoney 174.6.198.224 00:33, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Nutmeg (Ro) (Ro) ~ Redone
OA was Ravensong, redone to match the queen and the shaidng needed tweaking. Comments? 07:50 Mon Sep 17

The shading needs blurring and it shouldn't have a reddish tint. 02:37, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

The patches still aren't smudged the same direction. Also add a little more white to the tail tip. Not much though. Maybe a couple pixels wide.

The smudges almost look pixily, or not exactly pixily but look...computerish? (it makes no sense, I fail at explaining). Play around with your smudge settings, get a feel for it and try different techniques and it should come out natural looking. 05:53, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I suggest finding a reference picture to help you with how the way the fur naturally runs, usually helps me :) -- 06:19, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Bah, I'm withdrawing. 11:41 Wed Sep 19

I'll take over. 19:24, 19, 09, 2012

Re-uploaded Bleg I fails >.< 23:12, 20, 09, 2012

It is not a fail! Blur the shading on the belly a bit and darken the tail shading  23:34, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) -Tweaked
tweaked to have mottles. changes may not be showing yet. I fail ;.; Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 02:44, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the mottles and blur the white on the front paw.

Bluestar(L) - Tweaked
Defined the shading, OA was Ivy. Comments? 12:23, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and tint the shading so the color matches? Right now, it really doesn't.

Lighten the shading a bit. It didn't need to be darkened a ton, just a little bit. I still stand by saying it was fine before, with darker shading it doesn't match the other images anymore, but eh  20:08, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:17, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad.

Re-uploaded 04:12, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt(D) - Withdrawn
Tweaked for blotchy shading. OA was Leaf-storm. Comments? I don't like this. e.e 12:23, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Lighten the shading a tad. 19:24, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:28, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is edging away from the lineart just a tiny bit on ---> side. (Can't explain) Also could you blur the chest highlight a leetle? x3 08:59, 19, 09, 2012

It looks as if the shading gets lighter or darker in different spots... Can you fix that and make it match(?) better? 20:07, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to with draw this. I accidentally deleted my file, while cleaning out all of my other folders on my computer. =3 21:00, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

I could take over. 23:01, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Go ahead. 23:18, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, It looks almost as if the actual pelt color is grey, Maybe sharpen the shading a bit :) -- 07:46, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Raven...don't comment on an old image when someone's volunteered to take over, and hasn't uploaded yet. 08:36, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Oh o.o Im sorry, I honestly didn't mean to. Ill be more careful, I thought she had already posted the new image -- 05:49, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Umm... I'm pretty sure she can post a comment on improvement as nobody had the same comment.

Not if somebody was about to take over and redo the tweak... But it's a simple mistake. Don't worry about it Raven. 22:20, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar(Alt L) - Tweaked
Wow, this is what, the fourth Bluestar charart I've tweaked/made?(Not counting the one that was declined, like four months ago.) Tweaked to have the torn ear match, OA is Ivy. Comments? 04:28, September 23, 2012 (UTC)