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Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:09, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Try...Making the floof more fluffy and shaggy. It looks spikey now. :S 18:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Dazzly? o3o 09:59, 14, 06, 2012

Uhm...withdrawing. ^^; *is no good at floofs* 10:12, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3 16:54, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. ^^ 05:45, 15, 06, 2012

Add a little more floof on the haunch. 22:35, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, Silver only just took over and hasn't uploaded yet. Please don't comment if she still hasn't uploaded... 05:02, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ohmaigawsh I killed it ;3;. 23:33, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Add more floof, or define it. =3 23:43, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added a few, and defined a few too. 23:05, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the lineart on the haunch and back a bit smoother. It's a bit, for lack of better word (not meant as an insult) messy in those spots. 05:20, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded No offense taken. 17:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the shaggy lineart on the haunches to two pixels. And the colored part of (our left) haunch looks like it has darker pixels towards the top, try smudging over it with the original color or try color picking from the original color and going over that part. 21:43 Mon Jun 18 Reuploaded Sorry if it doesn't look thick enough, pixlr only has odd numbers for brush sizes. If it doesn't look thick enough, it'll be fixed. 11:52, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. 21:01, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? 21:08, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And do kittypet kits need a collar...? I can't remember x.x 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

He wasn't a kittypet, he was a rouge or something, he was part of BloodClan as a kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 22:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Unsure on changes. 22:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 22:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Kill ze waste. 22:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the black a tad. 02:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiiiny bit lighter, so the white is lighter. (But then you might have to define the shading on the back. Doesn't make sence. =_=) 07:19, 08, 06, 2012

Re-Ups^ @Dazzy, I'd rather not smudge because it doesn't look smudged on the rogue and loner images. 21:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is kind of flat... Can you define the lightsource? 14:17, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Black and White cat shading. e.e 18:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks flat. Define the 'highlight' and enlarge it, and darken the shading. 18:37, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I tried by best. e.e 17:54, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on ---> side. Skt Spoilers... 02:57, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

It may be just me, but there seems to be darker colored squares on the chest... ouo 03:49, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it too, but it looks like a square of lighter pixels. owo Also define the shading on the white. Skt Spoilers... 04:10, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, my computer account is being spazzy and I can't log into it, and that's where I have all my files. e.e I will possibly be able to fix it though. 20:00, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Re-Ups^ Yes, I am so sorry I was unable to give you guys my 100%, but my computer had issues. :/ I tried the best I could to fix what you needed. :) 21:21, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (Ki) - Redone
You are looking at failure. So hard to draw dem stripes on dis small, cute, little, adorable kit blank! Meh. Redone to match other images. Comments? 04:49, 09, 06, 2012

Define the shading. Nicely done.

Adorable <3 Maybe blur the stripes a Tiny bit, And possibly make his base coat more, cream? Not sure if thats the right word, more like his other images, looks a bit pink to me. -- 06:04, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. ^^ Raven, I wasn't quite sure what you ment, so I just airbrushed the coat color with a lighter, pinkish color a bit. 06:23, 10, 06, 2012

Define the shading more, and perhaps thin it out a bit as the color looks off cause of it. Also, where's your light source? I can't quite tell. 09:19, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit? 19:33 Sun Jun 10

Reuploaded -  Just redid the shading. 02:37, 11, 06, 2012

There's a little bit of waste around his tail. 19:26, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:58, 12, 06, 2012
 * Changes ain't showing. 06:02, 12, 06, 2012

I'm not sure if it's the base pelt or the shading, but he looks too dark. lighten the shading if it's that~ Skt Spoilers... 13:21, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I believe it's the shading. x3 09:10, 14, 06, 2012

Still doesn't match.... not sure what to tell you, if it's the shading. Maybe thin it out even more. 06:15, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I'd lighten the shading some more, but also thin out the head stripes. 22:42, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Err... this image irks me, the shading, the stripes, the colors. x.x  06:24, 16, 06, 2012

Reuploaded Changed colors to match. 04:24, 17, 06, 2012

Can you define the shading just a tad? >.<  14:59, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Misty but I would prefer not to since I got the layer opacity for the shading from Paleh, and it's already above that, but I'll change it if you like. ;) 06:09, 18, 06, 2012

Defining doesn't necessarily mean darkening, it could mean making it not so blurry. And in that case, I agree with her. Opacity can stay the same, but make it more.... visible and definable. 09:59, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Redid that irky shading. -fingers crossed it looks better- <span style="">09:22, 19, 06, 2012

Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Near the top of the tail looks like some miscolored pixels. Can you fix those? 19:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur stick out more like the other images, rather then curve a bit. It should basically stand on end, like he got electrocuted or something. 22:50, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not good at tail tweaking... o3o Withdrawn. 22:59, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 99.58.201.247 23:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * That was me. o.e  23:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur at the base of the tail stick out more. 23:02, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, please don't critique the charart if the user taking over hasn't uploaded yet. <span style="">05:40, 16, 06, 2012

Reuploaded I tried :P  02:35, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more....poofy, for want of a better word. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 00:12, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Widen the tail a bit. =P 00:55, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little white pixel on the tail. Kinda towards the base, on the top.... *fails at describing where* 05:24, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Pebble (TB) ~ Redone
First time doing mud, and first time doing a To-be, The last one to have edited her was Paleclaw. Her shading and the mud needed to be redone. 17:22, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. 17:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened the shading. -- 17:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Er, Raven Scarlet said she wanted this. If you keep this, please make the gray match the old image, the color didn't need to be changed. 19:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, just noticed the pale part. Just darken her a little bit then so she doesn't look so white, and define the earpink. 19:21, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

oh! I'm really Really sorry! I had no idea I swear, If she still wants it its totally fine with me, she can take it over, Really sorry. -- 23:03, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 23:24, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading moar --<span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   20:24, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define/brighten the ear-pink 22:34, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading. And darkened it a bit -- 22:39, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened/defined the ear-pink -- 22:42, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tried to match her more to her Caveguard -- 06:22, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 22:13, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the base coat to match the caveguard --<span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   00:32, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 03:45, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lilystem (Q) - Withdrawn
Shading needed blurring. OA was Darkhallows. Breeze whisker  17:40, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading as well? Not a whole lot, but just enough so it's a bit easier to see. ( thank you this image bothered me so damn much )

Reuploaded. Made the lighting a bit more dramatic. That should do it. xP Breeze  whisker  17:51, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck/face shading. 21:25, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Try and smooth out the face shading? It looks a tad blotchy. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 00:10, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's all I'm doing with the face and neck. Anything else just looks plain weird. Breeze whisker  01:29, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's this little strip of unblurred shading at the bottom of the belly and tail (probably from the image before it was tweaked) Blur those bits? 05:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  15:39, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken/add shading to the ear-pink? It's kinda hard to see 22:35, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  00:26, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading and then darken it? (As it smooth it out and then darken the shading) :3 <span style="">08:57, 19, 06, 2012

If I darken it any more she won't look pale grey. As for blurring it, I think it looks fine. Breeze whisker  13:09, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you fix her eye? There's too much white; she looks blind. 00:12, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

I don't have any time. If anybody wants to finish it up feel free to. I'm just going to change the heading to withdrawn. Breeze whisker  03:42, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar12, and was redone by Paleh. I just made him more brown. Pad foot Mischief Managed 10:39, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

It almost looks like it's tinted pink... Can you make it more darker/browner? 19:41, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Stretch the ear-pink a bit bigger and darken it a tad 22:38, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the image. Breeze whisker  23:59, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkend him, desaturated the image, and tweaked the earpink. Comments? Pad foot Mischief Managed 01:54, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Grounded for a week, can no one take this? If Paleh wants it, she can have it, but if she doesn't, can I still have it. Didn't plan on getting grounded. Pad foot Mischief Managed 02:52, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Halftail (E) ~ Tweaked
Darkened him, toned down his highlights, added more shading, and fixed miscolored lineart. OA was Bramble I think, and Atelda. Comments? 21:36 Mon Jun 18

define the stripes, they get lost in the shading <span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   03:15, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (A) - Tweaked
...Ooohhh... That looked so much better in photoshop... Anyway, shading needed to be redone and pelt color had to be darker. OA was me. Comments? 23:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful, but This could be my computer, I see like, a ring around his hind leg shading (Its light). I suggest maybe blurring it. -- 18:44, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Dapplenose (W) - Redone
Pattern wasn't realistic, color was off, shading had to be redone.... etc. Comments? 00:11, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 00:24, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

This looks more spotted than mottled. Perhaps lighten the spots some and add more shades of grey? Breeze whisker  00:31, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:44, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

The ear-pink looks to neon to me. -- 18:47, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading now. c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 22:50, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) ~ Redone
Wheee redone to be mottled. OA was me. Comments? 00:19 Tue Jun 19

(Facepalm) I forgot about Scarly's. I don't have internet right now. I'll re-upload tomorrow maybe. 00:21 Tue Jun 19

Pebble (CG) - Redone
Ahh I've just been waiting to kill this. One of my first approved images. Needed to be pale gray, but otherwise I redid out of preference. OA was me. Comments? 02:36, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

define the shading a little bit --<span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   00:26, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Ah, the last one. OA of the most recent version is me. Same conditions as the others.

Define the shading. 06:49, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit. Cute kit is cute <3 Nice work! 06:51, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not touching the ear pink, as it matches the other images.

Cinderheart (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
I un-flattened the shading. OA was Wildfire. Comments? 10:30, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Furzepelt (A) - Redone
Needed to match her warrior. OA was Shelly. 02:06, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (W) ~ Tweaked
I do believe the OA was Mossy, with some tweaks by Flamingomom3. Anyways, the shading needed defining. And yes, this is tweaked. Icy can vouch for it.