Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Swiftbreeze ​(W) ~ Tweaked
Not exactly sure if it matches the StarClan pattern since it's at a different angle, but here we go! 23:22, 4/16/2017

There's a few facial stripes on the star image that aren't on here. 23:33, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Fixed. Think I got 'em 23:41, 4/16/2017

Recede the white on the underside of the chin slightly, only because on the star that's tweaked above, you left the chin gray. So just to match it right

I think you missed the stripe that stretches from one eye to the other. About half of it would be visible here. 00:50, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Fixed the white 00:59, 4/17/2017

I think there's still some dark stripes missing on the face that is present on the star image. The ones leading from the eyes. 23:51, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes are there, but they're very pale and hard to see against the colors 00:34, 4/19/2017

Can you define those stripes, then? They should be more visible, because as you said, they're pretty pale against the base.

And, sorry for double comment, but because of the star, the white should stretch at least little more --> way

Fixed. 02:53, 4/20/2017

Blur/smudge/soften the white; it looks like in some places, it was just erased without being fixed and it looks extremely hard-edged compared to the rest of the white on this image.

You still missed the stripe I meant. The one that looks like an arrow that connects the eyes. The stripe is between the eyes on the Star image. 01:15, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Fixed. I don't think we'd be able to see those stripes since it's at a different angle, but I did soften the white along the stripes and a tiny bit along the muzzle 18:46, 4/21/2017

Actually, I agree with Danny. There should be half that arrow leading from the eye to touch up to the lineart. From this angle, half of said stripe would be visible.

It wouldn't actually. I've checked and checked to make sure, and the stripe isn't visible from this angle 17:50, 4/23/2017

No, you'd see it. Spooky and Danny are correct. It would be a bit awkward to place, but you would in fact see that stripe.

Sparrow Fur (ES) ~ Redone
Was definitely not in the right mood and condition when doing this... Dx

can you like smooth out the "fur" lines? :p

Re-ups Don't know if this is better xD

Did you repulsed the image? I don't see a new upload on the file history. 18:35, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Omg I have no idea why it didn't show up? I'm pretty sure it's here now, though =P

Spottedleaf (MCA) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for white eartips. OA of redone pattern is Paleclaw, some tweaks by Stealth 22:01, 4/23/2017

Recede the white on the <-- ear? It looks more like it's covering the entire ear than just the tip. 20:05, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Quick Water (ES) ~ Tweaked
OA = me. Just lowered the opacity a little.