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Mapleshade (Alt. DF) - CBA
I was in a rush, so can it please be renamed? Sorry >< 13:39, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white front paw Storm  &#9835;  13:58, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Er... Storm, both front paws are white. Which one do you mean? 14:57, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Renamed. 8D

Should the tail be bushy and tangled like the other images? User: Dewdrops56/talk 15:15, June, 12, 2015

Would it not make sense for the same edited lineart to be used for both images? Whichever one that is. 15:57, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

this is trying to match the ginger and white alts, not the tortoiseshells. and messy fur doesnt have to match. 15:59, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

My bad. The one farthest from us please Storm  &#9835;  16:03, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

I only suggest it because the linearts match for every other set of Mapleshade's alts. Also, perhaps dull down the scars a bit? 16:08, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Ragged fur doesn't even really need to match in general, I think.. given that each image is a different point in a cat's life, the amount of raggedness, for lack of a better word, is going to change.

reups I went ahead and added a little bit of ragged fur lineart on the tail. But with all due respect, I'm keeping my lines instead of recycling Skt's. His lines are nice and all, buut I'd rather keep mine original. Just my two cents. also the apprentice images dont share exactly the same lines  16:21, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

I'm seeing lines on the white, did you add texture? I love it honestly but the other images don't have texture, so I think it has to be removed. 02:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

I think that's actually her shading, Stealth. I know I'm starting to do the same thing on my bi-colored cats, even without texture. it's a way to show depth and realism in the shading without having it monopolize the white and make it look flat.

Yes, that's shading. I have it that way to make the image look less flat, and to try and give more of an impression of unkempt fur. You're probably also looking at some of the stripes on the ginger. 08:13, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading. 10:08, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

reups, also tweaked the lines significantly. 22:03, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the belly shading just a tad, if you can. 16:48, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

reups 16:24, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

With light coming from in front of the face, the entire tail should be shaded, except for the part at the very top which connects with the spine. 02:18, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:16, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg. 03:12, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Which back leg? 11:36, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Oops sorry. The one furthest away from us. Also, would you mind defining the depth of the shading? 11:44, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

reups 00:59, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Hawkfrost (Alt. DF) ~ For Approval
I'm seeing these blanks everywhere now Jayie I love them so much! 01:09, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, please.

Re-ups 08:59, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading still looks dark - lighten it a few more ticks, please. 22:46, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 22:59, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture and add shading depth on the back 04:18, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 10:17, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading some more. It still looks a bit too hard-edged. 16:45, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture more on the tail. 23:58, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 09:53, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is still a little hard edged. Btw I don't think two highlight points (well, explaining) are needed on the shoulder...? Might be wrong :P I love his belly  S i l v e r m i s t i e   Dream it   Back to Future✼   01:01, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

It looks like your shading is coming from the right, so remove all the shading along the top of the back and add it onto the belly, behind the legs, and directly behind where the shoulder ends. Cover all of the tail in shading, as well, except for the very top, which is lined up with the slope of the back. Nice job! 02:09, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups – I completely redid the shading, but I didn't exactly understand what you meant by the tail shading. I also got rid of the texture as it seemed to make the shading look more hard-edged than it is 06:06, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

The whole tail besides the top should be shaded (the right side too). The shading still looks a little hard edged though. Can you blur it a little more? 13:44, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more please. ~ Sunstream ☽☾ Was it   ME?  15:41, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

(Pardon me if this sounds similar to what the others were saying) Smooth out the shading? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:16, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Snowtuft (DF) ~ For Approval
So many Dark Forest submissions, they're going like hotcakes! I've always had a soft spot for Snowtuft. 01:22, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading depth 00:26, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us and the light on the one farthest from us please Storm  &#9835;  12:33, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly expand the shading a tad everywhere? 16:44, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded, not sure if I made the shading too dark or not. 18:57, June 15, 2015 (UTC)'''

It is a little on the dark side, tbh. Maybe lighten it just a slight bit? Smooth out the shading a little more as well. Nice :)  00:40, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source, it looks a bit like there's shading all around the outline 06:48, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs? Also, the chest, back leg and tail end shading looks a little grey. Might I suggest tinting the shading to a colour other than grey, such as blue? It'll make it look less grey. 21:12, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? It's kinda flat at this moment I know, I swear I screw up way worse than you do when I shade white cats  S i l v e r m i s t i e   Dream it   Back to Future✼   01:08, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Wouldn't the scar show? If I remember right it said that he was sliced all the way to his belly  04:09, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

That's on his left side, I think User: Dewdrops56/talk 04:17, June, 16, 2015

Reuploaded 16:13, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading a lot more? And can you define the light/shading on his legs please? Storm &#9835;  17:06, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:09, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

If the shading is coming from directly above, more of the tail would be in shadow and there would be less shadow defining the top of the shoulder. Also remove the shading separating the tail from the rump, if that's the case. If it's coming from the right, add even more shading to the entire tail-most of the body would be blocking all of it out! Fantastic job on dealing with the white cat, though, because I still can't do them. 02:08, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Something came up so I won't be able to access my computer and reup the pic till Wednesday. Is that alright? I'm so sorry I can't get it up till then. 01:49, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:14, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the back leg furthest from us? Also, define the shading on the paws. 16:27, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure if there's a set style for these blanks, but I can hardly see the pupil.. mind moving it toward the center or where it's easier to see? -- Nachtide  The  Wikian   Squad 05:46, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps define shading overall especially the tail?

Brokenstar (DF) - CBA
I've made this piece of trash too much like chocolate and I want to eat him. Anyway, comments? Let's get this approved before Monday when I go on my last KS3 trip 01:48, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the scars and change the colour of the light part of the tail? It looks pink. 02:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

can you make his tail look more bent? i can hardly tell and he is named for it. 07:39, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Sorry, but I'd rather not touch the lighter part of the tail. It's the exact same color as the rest and I color-picked on the lightest pixel I could find on the rogue. 09:39, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts on the tail are the exact same coloring as the pale parts on the rest of the image- I would know, as I remember when most of these images were put on the tweak page and approval pages. The leader image is a good example- the pale parts clearly look pale and they're not pink. Where you color picked honestly doesn't matter, as it looks pink on this image, while it does not on his others. This is borderlining on the "it's fine and I don't want to change it" thing, and if you continue, I will be declining this. Where you color picked does not justify your comment- different shading methods will result in different colors.

Re-upped Exactly- The tail is the same color as the rest, that's why I was hesitant to change it only on the tail, and as for the color, I tried color-picking from the rogue, there was an unshaded pixel that betrayed the actual base color for the pale part, so that's where I got my whole pale colors from. There's really no need to pull out the declining threat when I say that I'd rather not touch the color because it came from one of his legit images. Now, I tweaked the pale parts a little, I'm not entirely sure if this changed anything, and I think it could be worse... 14:13, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

I'll pull the declining threat, as I am getting more than sick of the "it's fine" thing. It still looks pink, and I have that right as deputy of the project. The pale parts do not look the same, and I never said that they did on your image- I was talking about the other images in his set. Colorpick from the leader if you're going to colorpick, as the leader is the first image in the set, I believe. I never once said it didn't come from a legit image- also, I'm pretty sure everything is shaded on the rogue, given it's Scarlet's, and her shading and highlight style leaves no pixels untouched. If someone says something, then colorpick from a different image to satisfy the commentor- he has more than enough of them to chose from.

Add light to the eyes. I can barely tell them apart from the fur right now. 14:37 Sat Jun 13

Re-upped There, everything is from the leader. Also I would know f there is an unshaded pixel- since I zoomed in straight at the image to get a good color. I'm extremely tired right now and the last thing I want is another full scaled fight over "its fine" bullshit. I have tried to be well-behaved and I have tried to not pull out a direct "its fine" shit without good reason, but right now I really do not have any nerve to continue another fight over my first dark forest image. 14:41, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, if there is any.-- 16:44, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly no one should be too snappy about this. Burnt did this because we agreed that we can say "it's fine" for a reason. Her being wrong doesn't mean she was looking for an excuse. Anyway, blur/smudge the stripes a bit? They're kinda hard edged, maybe just on his shoulder. I like this :) Myself can ever do any linear edits besides a torn ear  S i l v e r m i s t i e   Dream it   Back to Future✼   01:14, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

From the angle your lighting is coming from, the tail would entirely be in shadow, especially the tip of the tail between the legs, as the front of the cat is bent down and the tufts of fur on the back are high enough to block out light to the top. Also add a little more shading behind the shoulder, leaking onto the belly, and behind the head, filling up more of the neck. This is pretty though! 02:05, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I can't really see the earpink, would you mind defining it? I really like this image though. Too bad you had to eat it 20:58, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Did I get everyone's comments? 05:55, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

is there any way to make the tail look.....less like its just a darker brown tail? i cant see the stripes or anything. 07:48, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I'm sorry, I lost the file and this was the best I could do ;; 08:55, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Beepaw (Ki) ~ For Evaluation
10:15, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and perhaps lighten it a little. 10:54, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. Looks wonderful for your first charart! Storm &#9835;  12:27, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, please. 16:43, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture a little bit. Cute (: 23:06, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad. I like this! 23:59, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ 09:48, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a little bit more, dull down the texture some more as well, and add some shading between her front legs on her underbelly? Storm &#9835;  14:27, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Why would she need more shading on her front paws and underbelly? She has enough there. I think you should lighten the shading a little more. 17:45, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

No, between the front legs on her underbelly. There'd be just shadow there, and there's not really enough. Storm &#9835;  20:48, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but I agree that it is fine. There is shading there, and there's no less than there is on a bunch of other images. 21:11, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Storm. The underbelly is approximately 3 pixels wide, and 5 pixels long. It does not need that much shading. 00:05, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups — hope I got it, I'm crap at shading, and Wikia won't let me upload the image to the correct file name… did I miss anything? 11:37, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a little more. 12:32, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Sparrowfeather (DF) (DF) - CBA
Eh... comments? 00:33, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. More shading on the bend of the front leg? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:10, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 14:38, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

youve coloured in the gap between the tail and leg. 15:06, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Oops. 16:01, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

With light coming from the front of the face, the whole tail should be in shadow, and anything along the spine (top of the neck above the head, top of the tail, the whole back, etc) should be in light. Also add a little mroe shading coming from behind her armpit, leaking onto the belly. Very lovely though! 02:21, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 17:15, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a little bit of darker shading around the outer edges of the tail to show that it still has some sort of shape to it. 23:03, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:18, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add shading on both sides of the tail? (You nailed the back, but it could use a tiny bit more with the same darkness on the front, to really show it isn't a highlight.) 22:39, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:44, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the main body shading, if possible? 08:09, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 14:39, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe define the back shading, if there is any? Love that pattern ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:06, June 24, 2015 (UTC)


 * There is no back shading, based on the light source. 20:21, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading on the main body could be defined a bit.

Re-upped This is the best I can do with the main body shading. If you want me to define it further, can you tell me where, because maybe I'm not understanding. 01:11, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Nope, that was all I wanted. CBA?

Flowerpaw (Star) ~ For Approval
Yay! My first StarClanner! Everything from the apprentice, as I have the file. Storm &#9835;  15:41, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Damn, shes gorgeous! Define the facial shading towards the top of the head just a tad, please. 05:30, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Which part of the head, I may ask? By the very top, or towards the side? Thanks Breezey! Storm &#9835;  05:38, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

More towards the top, near the ears. 08:35, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Not really sure where you wanted. Storm &#9835;  19:32, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, you got it. Add a little more depth to the eyes, if you can. 17:59, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Okie-dokie Storm  &#9835;  19:49, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

What a beaut! Smooth out the root of the tail's shading just a bit maybe? She's so preeeeeetty  S i l v e r m i s t i e   Dream it   Back to Future✼   08:09, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

theres like a weird darker strip around her haunch area, is that supposed to be there? 18:25, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

reups I has smoothed out the root and idk what you meant skt, but I blurred the shading around that area a bit more, as that may have been the problem. Storm &#9835;  00:38, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the facial shading? 02:31, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly cannot define or blur the facial shading any more or it'll look too blurry. If someone tells me otherwise, I'll try to make it less blurry Storm  &#9835;  02:44, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

The flecks look a bit less visible and more smudged/part of the pelt than this image does.. they also look more blurred on the apprentice. It's not that the placement doesn't match or anything- it looks like it does. It's just how they're stylized that doesn't quite match...and given that I'm tired, there's no way this sounds constructive at all- I can try and clarify once I've gotten some sleep if you're not sure what I mean.

Reups I gotcha Snowy. Storm &#9835;  00:40, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (DF) ~ For Approval
I tried 15:58, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Also, I am aware that it looks a bit flat - I'll sling in a few highlights on my next upload. 14:29, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reups that's better 16:35, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. 13:46, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 16:32, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (W) ~ Withdrawn
<3 Torties 17:10, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the shading on the front leg furthest from us. Also, maybe it's just me, but I think the shading might be leaking a little on the tail. 19:14, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink? 13:25, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Ice 14:00, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think maybe smooth out the shading and shrink it slightly on the head :) Nice!

Re-ups Thx 15:26, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing 16:21, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Antpelt (DF) - CBA
finally 18:15, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading/even it out. 13:47, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Would you mind also smoothing out the shading on the hind legs? 15:46, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded 16:13, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Flamenose (Star) ~ For Approval
My hand o.o Cranked out as a break from my calculus homework, but I think he turned out well for being done relatively quickly dear god it was 12 layers... 03:41, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading some more? I love flamenose's description!! although it'll most likely change when GC comes out don't mind me  Storm  &#9835;  04:00, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the main ginger should be paler so the dark parts stand out more, and more of the face and tail should be dark, not just the stripes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:03, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Oh my gosh Sun your chararts :o <3 Maybe add some shading to the bottom of is chest? It should be there as there is shading on the bottom of his...side thingy :P He looks so awesome!!!

reupped Lightened the base, put darker color on 100%, smoothed the shading (or at least tried to), added chest shading, darkened shading (since it looked practically nonexistant on the darker areas). And thank you! :D  13:51, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Looks much more amazing sun! Can you smooth out the haunch shading a bit more? Storm &#9835;  14:15, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

reupped ^.^  18:25, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstar (Star) ~ For Approval
Don't even ask. I forgot how to do charart DX

I can send you the files, if you like. Also, could you add shading to the shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:00, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you change the earpink to a more pink color? It appears as the same brown as his underbelly and paws.... Storm &#9835;  04:01, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sure Jayie I would love that. Storm, I will change the earpink soon (more like right now) but I just thought did I need to match the original earpink color so yea, I would do that now.

re-ups I wasn't too sure about the shoulder shading so I added stuff, correct me if I got it wrong :P

Could you leave an email on my talk page to send the files to? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:13, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Already did so^^

Also is it just me or did you forget to color in the nose? Storm &#9835;  04:33, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

I don't really see any color on the nose on his leader image?

It's slightly darker than the brown on his muzzle and around his eyes. You can just grab it from the files I sent. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:39, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups did I get it?

There's also darker fur on her face, and around his muscle and eyes. Did you look at the files I sent? It should have all the colors and markings there. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:22, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Boulderfur (Star) ~ For Approval
Okay... first image in a while. pardon if it looks bad, i'm posting this at almost 3 in the morning and am as scared as hell of the thunderstorm. Anyway... I chose green eyes instead of the blue on the other images because I realize I suck at blue eyes and since the eye colour isn't canon. (if i misnamed or aligned my bad) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 07:40, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Your eyes have to match the other images, sorry. If they are blue on the other images, then so does this one. Also, blur the shading more and it's leaking on the main body ( omg im almost crying it's the end of the school year, so I apologize if I sounded blunt there ;.; ) 08:22, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the front legs. And could you possibly add some shading depth to the side of his face? And maybe some earpink shading as well, I know there should be earpink shading. Not much, just a little bit towards where the ear canal is and on ==> this side of the ear a little bit to show your light is coming from where it is Storm  &#9835;  14:18, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

The nose should be gray like it is on the apprentice. 14:44, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Kinda redone Sorry if I forgot something. I'm just having a hard day. Couldn't sleep 'til 4am (Stupid storm making me cry  ) no worries, Foxy  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:06, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail. The shading is still leaking a little on the main body. 19:14, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry if this sounds like a stupid question, but could you tell me specifically where? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, it doesn't sound stupid at all - I know, "main body" is real vague. It is mainly leaking where the main body meets this <--- side of <--- foreleg. It is also leaking a little bit along the bottom of the main body - just zoom in on that area because there are a few places it's leaking just a little. Hopefully that was helpful - sorry, I'm really bad at explaining. 19:25, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not a problem, but I think I blurred the shading too much because I did define the shading but it's not showing up. I can't tell if the shading is still leaking by the bottom. Anyway, does anyone think I should darken the shading? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 23:04, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Troutstream (Star) ~ Declined
First StarClan! I am at the point where I have no high hopes here but anyways~ =/ ~  Sunstream ☽☾ Was it   ME?  14:38, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Um, Sziri had this reserved first... 14:42, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

We both reserved on the 24th...??? Ugh now we have to go through this. ~  Sunstream ☽☾ Was it   ME?  15:28, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, Sziri reserved it before you did, therefore this image is hers. You both may have reserved it on the 24th, but according to the history, she reserved it first. 16:09, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Alright then. Bye. Ugh right now I feel like everyone hates me. ~ Sunstream ☽☾ Was it   ME?  16:18, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Of course no-one hates you. It was just a mistake, no more. 16:31, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sun you're not allowed to decline an image. Storm &#9835;  16:32, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

There 17:33, June 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (DF Alt2) - For Approval
Okay, so for those who don't know, the stripes on a black tabby are actually supposed to be lighter than the base (which means I need to redo Crowtail one of these days), so if you're seeing light stripes, this is intentional and I didn't mess up. The eyes, ears, and mouth are the exact same thing as his silver tabby alt, which was just approved.

Beautiful. Can you define the shading a bit? 02:29, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you be a bit more specific and tell me where you'd like the shading defined, if you don't mind?

Like, the main body? 02:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Alrighty.

Mumblefoot (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
Oh.My.Gosh.I've failed terribly at the ragged fur xD. PoppyShine (talk) 04:57, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

There are 2 flecks of waste near the chest fur. Please remove it. Also, should he have patchy fur, or not, as that's what's depicted in the other images? And there's a fleck of waste underneath the tail.~User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:30 June 26 2015

I don't think he gets ragged fur as that may be only for his elder rank. Correct me if I'm wrong. Also define the shading on the main body. Hey poppy, I was wondering if you want to, would you be willing to be my apprentice? If so let me know on my talk page, and then file out a request on the mentor program page. Storm &#9835;  05:35, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Of course ^-^. PoppyShine (talk) 05:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Also on the front front, facing us, there looks like there is some waste under there. Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:49 June 26 2015

Yeah I think he doesn't get the ragged fur, since he was a young warrior. 06:59, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined everywhere, not just on the main body. Also, blur the earpink. 12:04, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

The second fur tuft thing on the chest isn't coloured in. This is amazing for your first(?) charart! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:56, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded it.I removed the waste,blurred the earpink, and defined shading.PoppyShine (talk) 00:10, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

The ragged fur still needs to be removed...? 00:22, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Not trying to argue but, isnt ragged fur part of a cat's trait that they recieve when they are kits, take Raggedstar and Reedfeather for example. PoppyShine (talk) 00:27, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Honestly, I'm not sure we'll know for certain until GC comes out, so for now the ragged fur needs to be removed. If I'm correct in assuming the ragged fur cite was only for his elder rank. Storm &#9835;  00:42, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt DF) ~ For Approval
Something to start off the summer. 08:31, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

This is so beautiful. Would you mind smoothing out the shading on the legs closer to us just a little? 12:11, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks~ :) 13:28, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. Can you define the light on the curved leg over there? ==>  13:46, June 26, 2015 (UTC)