Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Brightheart (Alt W2) - Redone
See above. :b Comments? 23:10, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading a wee bit? I love this somuch<3 22:42, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the botton of the ear-pink a touch too 23:34, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Kay. Won't have my files and gimp till tuesday or so though. So I'll do it then. 08:35, December 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - New computer, whoo! 17:21, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Specklepaw (A) - Tweaked
Darkened the shading. OA was Loonie. 23:51, December 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight. 00:03, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur where the earpink meets the pelt and possibly define the speckles. 00:14, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:58, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts? 20:52, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:26, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 22:59, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:53, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) - Tweaked
Defined shading. OA was Leafstrike. Comments? 01:46, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I know this probably wasn't part of what you were supposed to do, but the earpink looks a very un-natural shade of pink, so maybe you should desaturate it a little or just change the shade al-together. Also, the shading is really dark; I can barely see the lineart. Can you lighten it a little please? 02:01, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine.. 02:20, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think Sunny's right. While I can see the lineart, it does look an little bit to dark to me, might be my screen though. 02:35, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

He's a black cat. Not dark grey. The lineart wouldn't be visible in the darker spots. I think the shading is fine. 02:55, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I guess that sounds right.... but the earpink still needs to be fixed imo  02:59, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:10, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on the tail 02:26, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think it's fine. 03:56 Mon Dec 17

I had shading this dark, and I got told I had to lighten it. ._. Can you lighten it juuuust a smidge? Like, nothing real drastic.

I disagree, it looks fine. 21:11, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (Ki) ~ Redone
do not ask me to define the earpink it's the same colour as the warrior okay. Anyways, redone for stripes. Cooments? 08:58 Sun Dec 16

Can you maybe add a bit more stripes to him? I know that since it's a kit blank, it would be hard, so if you can't that's fine. 20:54, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

OMG so adorable<3333 define the earpink. 03:51, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

If I define the earponk, it will not match his warrior and apprentice. The earpink can straight from the warriors .xcf and I'm not changing it if I can help it. 03:56 Mon Dec 17

Ruby (KP) ~ Redone
Redone for multiple reasons. OA of the latest was Thistleshine. oocoments? 00:20 Mon Dec 17

Define the shading a bit? 02:44, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

...mm, I think the overall shading is fine, but define the tail+facial shading... can you blur where the pelt meets the earpink? 03:49, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I felt the facial shading was fine so I left it alone. =P 10:33 Tue Dec 18

Swallowtail (W) ~ Tweaked
Honestly I hate how I did the shading.. x.x OA was Icecloud33 with I believe a shading tweak by me. 02:49, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you move the head highlight to around the muzzle area, and define the non-shaded parts on the front legs? :D 22:58, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (W) - Redone
My Brighty! <3 I reworked the patches, stripes, and shading. Though it's the same image, probably enough to call it a redo. OA was me 00:19, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Shading seems kinda flat. Define it?

Re-uploaded. I hope I don't turn her gray again... 00:31, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks grey again. Expand the highlights, especially on the face and shoulder. 05:50, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Ro) ~ Withdrawn
Tweaked to be light grey and add the pale under belly ( I think I should've just redone it...it barely matches. ) I also redid the shading because it was icky. OA was moi 03:36 Tue Dec 18

Define the shading a little more? 05:49, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:25 Tue Dec 18

Oh crud, just realised I've actually got three tweaks up... I'd forgotten about little Runningkit up there... So... withdrawing this so as to not break tweaking rules. 10:49 Tue Dec 18

Tigerstar (Alt. L) - Tweaked
Darken and defined shading, redid scars and earpink, darkened it, and made the ear match his main image. OA was Iceheart, comments? 17:22, December 18, 2012 (UTC)