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Tuna (Ro) - For Approval
Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading 21:36, 9/07/2017

Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading

Renamed.

Define the shading a bit on the front leg furthest from us, and the light on the front leg closest to us. 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

think you can make the shading by the hind leg curve a bit? it looks add cutting right across the thigh. 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Try and curve the haunch shading more - still looks the same in cutting across the haunch. I also think that the light needs to be defined on the the < side of the cat, and definitely expanded on the face.

Define the ear pink. Good job. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:24, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on all legs/paws, and on the tail

could you expand the shading on the back and flank? 12:11 Mon Sep 11

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

He needs to be a tabby (unless my cite is wrong, then ignore this)

I have the ebook version of Tigerheart's Shadow, so I can't check. But if somebody who does have the solid version can verify it, I'll add it. I'm assuming you have it, as you added the site? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:10, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

I checked it. He is confirmed as a tabby. 21:27, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ahhh I lurve him with stripes --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:43, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws again

Define the shading depth on the tail and hindleg closest to us, just a tad. 20:55, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

think you can connect some of the tabby stripes to each other and the legs and back and tail? they look a bit more like mottled markings to me as they are. 22:42, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I changed the stripe pattern and shading, though I think now I maybe should have tried to change the previous one. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe connect them on the back like how a ticked tabby would be. They still look like they're all over the place. Maybe add a dorsal stripe and add more stripes to the face, legs, and tail? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 20:16, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the light on the front paws a little more, and maybe smooth the stripes a tad? 0:40 Thu Sep 14

Define the earpink^

Reups How do you facial markings? --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:32, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

there's waste around the ears

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:50, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

It's still there, it's like a triangular patch between the ears

There's also some above the nose

Reups

Define the shading on the ears^

Raindrop (Ki) - For Approval
shiny rain kitty 12:18 Mon Sep 11

smooth out the darker shading... ? if that makes any sense lol 13:07, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the ear pink a bit. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:30, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Are you using highlights? If you are, could you dull them down a little bit? I'm not sure if it's shading clashing with the base or not...but she seems kinda shiny?

re-up 23:59 Tue Sep 12

can you make the nose solid black?

Define the light on that back paw a little^

re-up 21:04 Sat Sep 16

re-up again i wasn't liking the shading so i changed it up. 21:43 Sat Sep 16

re-up again again i promise this is the last time i just accidentally turned off the nose/earpink layer 21:45 Sat Sep 16

Smooth the neck shading?

Birdy (Ki) ~ For Approval
I messed around with the shading layer a tad, I'm trying a new style. 22:39, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

She seems a little.. not neon.. but unnaturally colored (unless this is colorpicked/similar to her manga color, then ignore me)

I don't know, honestly. I don't have the color version. 23:08, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe try #8d6d48? That's what I got when I colorpicked from a picture of the color version.

Reuploaded Thank you so much Star! That really helped. 00:35, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a bit under the chin? Define the ear pink and shading depth. 02:22, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:46, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading a little bit? It's a little hard to see. 21:03, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

I almost feel like the neck shading should be receded a little tiny bit, as it being shaded even on the > side of the cat kinda contradicts the light source imo.

Still working? 20:30, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Streak (Ki) ~ For Approval
Since I never got around to it: to everyone to complimented me, thank you! 22:57, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

the line of shading on the --> seems a little too straight. could you curve it a little so it follows the body more? if that makes any sense. nice image btw 0:03 Wed Sep 13

Could you redline or circle where you're talking about, Princess? I just want to make sure where to curve it. 10:18, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

here's an outline of the area <span style="">0:33 Thu Sep 14

Reuploaded I don't know if this is any better. Also, thank you! :) 21:01, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the --> front leg a bit? 01:40, September 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Increased the opacity of the shading by a few ticks so it might have helped make the leg shading more visible. 19:44, September 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out tail shading. Looks good! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:15, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks... but I think I ruined the tail shading. 23:52, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

Could you please define the tail shading? --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:20, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded My motivation is blah. (Also darkened the shading again by a few ticks, could help to define it.) 00:00, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading in particular, though? I can see an overall definition, due to the darkening, but the tail shading still isn't very visible/dark in comparison with it.

Breezepaw (RC) (Alt A) - CBA


Hrm, this is awesome and there's nothing wrong with it that I can see.... so let's go to a CBA. No point in letting this sit.

Rippletail (SC) (Lo) - CBA
This took no time at all but guess what? white cats SUCK

Smooth out the shading on the back of the neck? 17:10, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

reups also whitened him some more bc his entire right haunch was tinted purple. not a pixel of pure white

Pretty :) CBA?

Cloverfoot (Lo) - For Approval
01:59, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

can u define the gut shading some 00:06, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:28, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (Lo) ~ For Approval
Why is he leader? 02:29, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Because he's not that bad of a character and deserves it a heck of a lot more than some cats do. Define the light on the front two legs?

Reups Fair point. I'd rather have Tigerstar than Crowstar. Also, I went ahead and defined the light on all of the legs since the back ones seemed a little dark, too. 12:50, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Husker (KP) ~ For Approval
All colors from loner. Comments? 17:16, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the pale belly slightly?

Reuploaded. 20:39, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Little Mew (K) ~ For Approval
lookin like a hotty// probably change the shading colour to black hmm 21:33, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

This looks great! Define the shading a smidge

re-up ill define it better on the legs 21:47, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

re-up 21:50, September 19, 2017 (UTC)