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Hunter Blanks - For Approval
I plan on resizing them but that's easier to do toward the end. I also want to edit the tail on the shorthaired blanks a bit. Ref for the pose can be found here. 17:01 Sun Jul 1 2018

can u make the longhair tail somewhat fluffier 19:08, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

Could you add whiskers? 00:30, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

You don't have much of a limit here, but I'm just going to bump this so you know that you do have at least two comments here. Not sure if you've seen them or not.

Add more fluff to the longhairs shoulders and neck? 20:23, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Resized and added floof+whiskers. 1:52 Tue Jul 10 2018

Idk if this is nitpicky or not, but could you have the whiskers connect to the face? :) These are very good, though, Raelic. 01:59, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

maybe a little fluff on the neck/chest area thats showing of the longhair? 20:21, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Wouldn't the whiskers also be on the side facing us? 06:13, July 11, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry! Thought I'd have more time this weekend after moving but my fiance has the laptop. I'll try to get these re-uploaded Thursday but I'm getting married this weekend so it might be Monday v or Tuesday.

Do you mean not having the whiskers forward, Icy? 2:40 Tue Jul 17 2018

Yeah, I think I mean flipping them around. (If that makes any sense.) 10:32, July 17, 2018 (UTC)

Unknown Resident Blanks - For Approval
I'll fix the paws and some anatomy soon. Just wanted to get these up. 18:42 Tue Jul 3

There’s waste outside the back paw on the short hair 23:25, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed some things that were bothering me. I may need to tweak the pose a little bit but for now I like these. 20:37 Fri Jul 6

I think the front legs should be slimmer? Not entirely sure, though. 21:45, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

I feel like we'd be able to see the cats thigh bent somewhat more? and the front half of the body seems a bit thicker in comparison to the back, which seems a bit thin if you get what I mean? the front leg closest to us also seems a bit too thick in comparison to the rest of the legs. 01:31, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the lineart of the back leg closest to us double-pixels? Just in that one spot it isn’t, on both images. 21:09, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Still working, Sun? I know there’s not much of a limit for blanks, but.. . 05:40, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

I am. I've just had some problems with my tablet. I'll upload later today ^^; 11:20 Thu Jul 12

Reuploaded I'm working on that rump area, bear with me there 15:10 Fri Jul 13

Reuploaded If anyone can give me a red line to reference in fixing the proportion issue in the rump, it would be very appreciated ^^' 17:03 Fri Jul 13

Reuploaded 17:09 Fri Jul 13

I think there's some white waste along the ---> hind leg? Lovely images! :D 05:32, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Could you curve the back some more? Also I'm not too sure about this, but I think the belly should be lower than the chest at this angle? 15:57, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

By any chance, could you make the head higher so it aligns with the back or is maybe even a bit taller? 10:32, July 17, 2018 (UTC)

I'll try to. I'm going to be driving back North today, so I'll upload the version I have and then try messing with the head. 13:31 Tue Jul 17

Reuploaded Redid the tail on the longhair to define the stomach line as well. 18:18 Thu Jul 19

Dovewing (GC) ~ For Approval
#itried, I'll redo the shading later as I'm not very happy with it. But I am the Chosen One 12:52, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

While you do, define the shading everywhere, I can hardly even see it. 13:30, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the earpink as well.

Define the belly's pale parts^^ 21:27, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, did a different shading for the body and did my best to match the pale parts to her other images. But I am the Chosen One 15:42, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Looks good so far. Your light source is confusing, but a simple way to fix that is to swap the front leg shading. Also, try and avoid leaking shading on the back legs (basically it's leaking into the stomach if you get me) Speaking of which, I think there should be shading on the stomach of some sort.

Smooth out the shading.

Define the pale on the belly. 20:51 Sun Jul 15

Re-Ups, I defined the chest some but as far as I saw on the other images, the pale parts didn't reach the stomach. I also added more shading on the stomach. But I am the Chosen One 13:31, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

I'm quite sure the other images have pale covering the belly - per the kit image (which was first), and it's quite visible on the loner. The other images have shading over it, hence it being not as visible, but it's there. 13:42, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I added the stomach paler parts. Its not very bright as that's where shading is. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 14:12, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more toward the top of the hindleg and shoulder. Define the light on the front legs. 14:26, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Try a stronger blur tool (check hard edged if you're using GIMP). The shading should be smoothed out everywhere except for the legs, imo

Re-Ups, I defined the light on the legs and smoothed the haunch and belly shading since those do meet. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 10:28, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just my screen, but the shading seems to be leaking in a couple spots, specifically near the base of the tail and in the corners of the underbelly. I know there are pale parts there, but the shading still shouldn't be coming away from the lineart. 11:54, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I tried to fix it, hopefully I got it. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 20:23, July 19, 2018 (UTC)

Violet (KP) (W) ~ For Approval
14:37, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little; it kind of clashes with the pattern if you get what I mean

Smooth the shading on the haunch. The transition is a bit abrupt. <span style="">20:49 Sun Jul 15

Re-uploaded. 15:17, July 17, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 06:52, July 20, 2018 (UTC)

Dew (W) ~ For Approval
I realize that a crap ton of things are wrong with this photo so I will fix them soon.

Define the earpink. 01:47, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the pale parts a little? They seem paler and more visible on her other images. 11:45, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

re-up

Smudge/blur the pale parts more so that it transitions well to the darker gray

re-up I tried