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Stonefur (A) ~ For Approval
Here he is! Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Take out the shredded ears. We typically assume that the injuries occur in the warrior rank unless the cat is mentioned with them as a kit or apprentice. 16:02, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Do i remove the scars aswell or not? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I imagine when his ears got shredded those scars came along with it as well. Give him a gray nose unless he's like his sister and has a pink one 16:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

* shakes head* he has a pink nose. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:18, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:39, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the earpink and darken it a bit, smooth out the shading on the haunch, it's a bit blotchy, and make the highlight/lighter part of the tail go all to way down, not just at the tip. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay....sorry i was busy....I'll get to it in a second.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink. And it looks like he has a lighter muzzle. 12:19, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawning, read what i said on Rosepetal.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? 13:18, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, alright I completely redid it. I have been wanting to do Stonefur's apprentice and now I can! 14:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I changed the heading if thats alright..... 01:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, define the light on the face and back, and darken the shading on your haunch 05:06, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I can't work on this today because I have this on a different computer. 14:26, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 13:59, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the sides of the pelt into the earpink. 22:05 Fri Jan 13

Also blur the earpink. 23:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink hun. 21:53, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading, it looks odd. o3o Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  22:07, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be reuploaded tomorrow or it'll be declined for a lack of work  03:21, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project may take over  02:50, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3  13:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Course. :)  Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:30, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:41, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color of the earpink be the same in both ears. 23:55, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

They are the same color. It looks different because of the shading. 00:05, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. 00:10, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

No. Don't. He was described with a pink nose. 00:13, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, all of Bluestar's kits have pink noses. ^^ Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. Sky-  Watchu want? 11:47, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Well then put shading on the other ear or something..because they don't look normal. One of them is neon, but the other is fine. 21:48, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:00, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit smaller and even out the shading; the head and shoulders looks darken than the haunch and tail xP 04:05, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:54, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur th earpink into the fur a little. -- 17:31, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:20, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Why are all his images different colors? XD Anyways, I think this is ready. CBA? :) 15:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to disturb the CBA, but in his description, it says "light." Shouldn't this and the other images be lightened, as it's in the description. 09:54, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lighten him up. I'll tell the html coloring for him so all his images will match. 13:04, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

This looks good to me. CBA? 23:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, Silver, but I don't see where your light source is. Your shading is kinda inconsistent. 02:16 Sun Jan 29


 * lol Remember to change the heading, Wildy xP 04:40, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. I want to work on a loner image. 11:51, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You're withdrawing this? Can I take over? 17:08, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

I took over, Re-uploaded =3 21:59, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more. 02:45, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

I think the shading could be blurred more Sky Dovahkiin  03:24, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken te nosepink, it's very neon. -- Elo legs 13:51, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took the nose-pink from Silver's apprentice Stonefur, but I still darkened it. 22:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. 03:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, he's described as light and all his images will be tweaked for that. And lighten the shading and dull the earpink. 18:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I've been seeing things saying that only one image can be worked on per person. So I'll withdraw this. If I am allowed to work on more than one, though, (which I highly doubt) you can tell me and rub it in my face saying "I told you so!" =3 22:52, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. Anyone who wants to take over may 01:01, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So from what I understand, if it's an apprentice, you can still have it and a loner up at once, right? I'm not completely sure, as the way it was explained was very confusing to me, but if so, I'd love to take over. o3o 09:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over, please? 20:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Yes, just go reserve it first  20:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you. I'm going to reserve it now. Reuploaded. 21:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. Looks nice~! <3 22:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you. :3 22:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Littlecloud (A) ~ CBA
All colors are from his medicine cat. Comments? 08:35, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more, on the sides of the earpink. 17:45 Tue Jan 3

Define the stripes and color his nose brown. 20:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Thinen out the shading on the haunch if that makes sence. 01:51, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Reuploaded. Naw, I got that, DJ ;) But I think I broke Littlecloud...and the burn tool hates me. XO 02:56, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded really quick. I think I fixed him ^^; 10:18, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and the shading, add some stripes to the legs, and blur the ear-pink. 04:08, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'll darken the shading and add stripes to the legs, but I'll only darken the stripes if someone else agrees. I got them directly from his MC. 11:18, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Scarlet. The stripes could be darkened just a tad. Try this hex: 732F0C 05:25, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid him again...but I like him better =3 05:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

The color seems to be a bit ginger compared to the others. Try matching the MCA a bit closer. 15:09, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 09:30, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 22:17, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x.x 07:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

The color is still off. 20:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Too ginger or brown? Or...what? xP 10:01, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Too ginger and too dark. Lighten it, make it less ginger, and define the stripes a bit. Try color-picking from the apprentice image.  Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:23, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *pants* I died in the making, and shifted the light angle. 01:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

If you died, you wouldn't have been able to post that. Define the shading. 01:55, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Moonleaf...I was joking. Anyways, reuploaded. 03:09, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I smoothed him out a tad, and brightened him, because he was looking squarish. It doesn't look like a big change but...ah, well. 03:27, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Extend the stripes a bit more and curve them a bit. 04:10, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've been tweaking up his shading, too. ;) 10:55, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit too ginger? Are you color picking? And if so, from which image? Maybe try his apprentice if you're not already. 22:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm colorpicking, yes. I used the MC at first, then tried his MCA. Oh, and Pale, this is his apprentice x) 04:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant MCA. XD And I think you're picking from the shading area then, if you're color picking. It's too dark and ginger. Try picking from and area with little or not shading, like the haunch, or the face. 15:07, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Dazzle? 02:09 Sun Jan 29

Yea, still working. XO Alright, thanks Pale, we'll see how this goes...reuploaded. Pixlr only lets me blur/smudge on same layer, so don't ask why I constantly redo if it's a color-change. 09:16, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes on the haunch and darken the shading a tad. Purdy C: -- Elo legs 13:47, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little more. 15:21, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Meep. Thanks Elo <3 01:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 20:23, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A) - For Approval
Here she is, Tawnyfur! I know it's a fail. I haven't done a real charart since 2010. So therefore, you shall reteach me (yes, I looked at the tutorials)! So.....Bring On The Critism! Oh yeah...I may re-do the shading if I have to......again, sorry, it fails. 07:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Figured out how to fix shading and other stuff. -- 08:43, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I love fixing stuff in the course of a few hours. Oh, and for those who don't recognize the name..... look in the first arc, somewhere between books 3-6 -- 10:04, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. This time I gaussian blurred it. But I left waste *dies* I'll try to remove it... hopefully. -- 10:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you =3 20:56, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred. 21:03, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around the image. 21:11, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading and according to my wand tool, I removed all the waste. Does the ear look weird? 22:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear looks good, but the pelt needs to be smudged into the earpink. Also, there looks like there i slighter fur next to the ear. 22:21, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There you go. -- 23:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 00:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 23:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure the whole belly is shaded. 06:43, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Reuploaded. Turns out I was blurring the earpink instead of smudging. Oops. Oh, and I did this without smudging the earpink that much, beacause I've got somewhere to be, so please wait, remind me, and I'll uploade later today/tommorrow 14:59, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? 01:36, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded wrong version. Once again, comments on my now beautiful Tawnyfur? 05:12, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

It's been about two days. Comments? 06:00, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. Also, can we tweak her images to look more golden brown? This is yellow, not golden brown. If we do, then we might as well start with the apprentice while it's up, so change that if anyone agrees. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred, but I didn't change the color. Please don't make me start over. Isn't the only thing that matters is that the image matches the warrior's image? 07:28, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more  17:09, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did it a couple times over actually....I wasn't happy with the haunches so I followed my instincts and used highlights. Hope it doesn't look ugly. -- 20:35, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

It's been about 2 days since a comment, so...comments (sorry I'm impatient)? -- 18:37, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 21:42, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:52, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and blur it as it just seems inconsistant :3 20:24, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I killed it *sob*. Anyway, I can't seem to get the shading consistent. But I blurred everything and found some waste. 23:14, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and is it just me, or does the shading seem.... gray-er than it does on the warrior?  Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:21, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I won't say grayer. But shading on the warrior seems lighter less saturated, so lighten the shading desaturate it. o3o sorry I was wrong before. 01:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading more consistant and define it. It looks like it's all smudged and blurred together. <span style="">18:37 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded. Pretty much redid it. I made the shading less gray and desaturated it. There was also some lineart misfunction, but I fixed it following the shorthaired female apprentice lineart. 02:45, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. <span style="">21:50 Wed Jan 25

Reuploaded, I blurred til my hand was sore. 09:36, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well, It needs blurring more, but i want only say: expand the higlinks/light parts and lighten the shadings a bit 17:08,January 27,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred, but if I expand the highlights the whole cats looks messed up. 17:57, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a touch greenish too me. What color are you using for shading? I've always found that using a rich, dark brown on tawny and brown cats works better. Redden the ear-pink a bit. 05:18, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 10:01, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you world, for the creation of the color replacement tool. 04:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurreded. 19:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shadin, and lighten it especially on the hind paw's heel. <span style="">15:42 Tue Jan 31

Darken the paws and the chest and blur the earpink. 18:07, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the whole image. Changes don't seem to be showing. 21:25, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the back leg shading. :3 <span style="">22:10 Fri Feb 3

Clawface (A) ~ For Approval
Splashpelt reserved it, but didn't put it up, and its past 2 weeks...so here it is. Comments? 00:28, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. 00:31, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. 00:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the shading on the haunch. Edit conflicts x.x 00:34, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Look at the innocent face on that evil'un. o3o If there is shading there, define it on the back paw furtherest away. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, there's no shading on that paw. I blurred the shading. Re-Uploaded. 00:52, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should give him a couple scars on his face. I know we normally assume that scars are obtained while a cat is a warrior, but considering his name... Well, yeah. Might just be me. 00:56, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Well, there isn't any proof, so I won't. Sorry, but it would probably just get removed, like Tornear's torn ear, because it was based on assumption based on the name. 01:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, for all we know, he could've gotten the warrior name Clawfoot. Can you blur the back shading a little? 03:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, there's a cite for his scars in his description. Tornear's ear was removed because there was no cite. 03:43, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

As an appentice though? It just said he was mentioned as being so-and-so's apprentice (I just skimmed quickly) 04:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. o3o <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 21:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not adding scars...sorry, but there isn't any proof. Like Ivy said, he wasn't mentioned having scars as an apprentice. Re-Uploaded. 23:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. 02:09, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink more 00:49, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I would make it a bit lighter to match his warrior charart... to me it kind of seems dark. 22:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The color is the same, but I was told to define shading, so I had to darken it a little. I got the colors from the warrior charart, though, so its fine. Re-Uploaded. 22:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. If you want to make it look lighter anyways and you have photoshop, you can do that by choosing a slightly light foreground color and using overlay with the paint bucket. 23:12, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the color is fine as it is. 23:40, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading a bit. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale  Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  00:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:50, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm leaving. Someone can take over. 23:58, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 23:59, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I have 3 projects already. 16:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over.17:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made him lighter because of his rouge image...but I'll change it back if anybody dislikes the colour. 18:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please change it back, the color doesn't really match either of his images now. It was fine before. And darken the shading a bit. 22:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:50, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. <span style="">02:35, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Mak ethe earpink less neon please. <span style="">19:08 Mon Jan 30

Re-Uploaded O.o I think I made it worse. Oh well..I'll just play with it for a bit see what happens xD..I personally think the earpink is fine but if anybody else wants me too I'll change it. 00:29, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading. ;D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  08:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 17:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit. <span style="">01:38, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-Uploaded 00:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw away from us. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  01:48, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading a tad. <span style="">04:50 Thu Feb 2

Re-Uploaded 01:46, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and blur the shading a bit more 06:05, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mak ethe earpink less neon. Purty! <span style="">18:35 Sun Feb 5

Oakheart (Alt. Ki) ~For approval
Hi! Like my charart? I made it pretty quickly =)

On the "characters needing art" page it said they needed a bracken alt, which might mean the alternate kit version, but I'm not sure so I'll post this anyways. 18:08, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

This isn't bracken colored. In fact, it looks exactly like his current kit image... 18:13, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I know it looks like his current kit image, but I made it on photoshop (I didn't copy it). I wasn't sure what the "bracken" meant. I'll make it lighter momentarily. 20:41, January 20,2012 (UTC)

It's a...thumbnail, I think? Change it pleeeease. 23:38, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I know I am not a part of the project, but if you don't know what "bracken colored" means, then you shouldn't do that charart.

Dethumbed. Rename the file Oakheart.kit.alt.png. Bracken colored is along the lines of this: If you use photoshop, use the eye-dropped tool to pick a color and use that as your base color. 00:21, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on his face and tail. You might want to fix it. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  13:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Light source looks a little bit, confused ,18:37,January 21,2012 (UTC)

I know what bracken looks like! I just wasn't sure what they meant by bracken on the characters needing art page. I'm going to use the colours from the alternate warrior version so that it looks the same. I'll also fix the lines around the muzzle and tail ASAP. 22:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

...Any more comments? -- 20:02, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

You should save it as a .png, not a .jpg, so the background will be transparent and there won't be waste pixels around the image. 02:10, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

It has to be png for more reasons than just that, so yes, change that. And rename this Oakheart.kit.alt.png. Also, be a bit more patient. Don't ask for comments unless you've been waiting a day or two and nobody's CBA'd or commented on it. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale  Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  23:58, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry; I'm just kind of an impatient person. Re-uploaded 00:52, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Minorly fixed heading, it still looks really pixely. 04:22, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, that's cayse it was saved as a jpg at first. I'm sorry, but there's not much way to fix that without redoing, so I think that's what you'll have to do. Sorry. 16:14, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Oh...great. That's ok though I guess, since I can do solids really quickly. I'll re-upload it ASAP 21:02, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:07, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Look here for shading placement. Right now I can't tell where your light source is. <span style="">02:36 Fri Jan 27

Are you still working on this? 03:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but two weeks isn't over yet. -- 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean exactly? You've got one week before a chararts declined, it's been 6 days. Just cause you have that long til you can reupload doesn't mean you should take the whole time. If you're still working on this, reupload it then. This will be declined if it's not uploaded by tomorrow. 18:00, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 00:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Have you looked at the shading placement? It still is lacking. <span style="">04:52 Thu Feb 2

Sorry, just forgot the shading on the legs. Re-uploaded -- 23:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I can't tell where your light source is still. It looks like a highlight on the chest. Define your lightsource please. <span style="">01:10 Sat Feb 4

The light source is kinda coming from the front. If you look at all the other kit images, (especially Bluestar's) they look pretty much the same. -- 02:03, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Round/darken the shading; it's a bit flat and define the light on the face. 06:04, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, re-uploaded. There wasn't much I could do about the shading; I think it's fine. -- 16:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the face and the shading still isn't right. It looks really flat and the light source doesn't make much sense. Look at the apprentice tutorials? 20:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

The light source is fine, I think. Look at Bluestar's kit image. It's the same. -- 22:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw(A)~For Approval


Its not great but i tried i know the earpinks bad im tryin to fix it so that doesnt need comments about ear pink ill fix it so any other comments? 22:12, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png, lighten the shading, colorpick the earpink and scar off the kittypet image, and perhaps blur the shading. 22:13, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I use pixlr what is colorpick? 22:19, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Colorpicking is when you open the other image found on their page on the editor and use the eyedropper tool to get the color from the image. 22:21, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

oh thanks 22:25, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the ear pink was hard to change because it wasnt saved under layered before thats why its bad 22:41, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure that chararts should be saved as a .jpg...They are normally saved as a .png. Also, the file name is still...wrong. The A in apprentice shouldn't be capitalized. Blur and lighten the shading. 22:47, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Chararts shouldn't be saved as jpg, otherwise they pixelate. You might have to redo and save as a png. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 23:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i know yet again the earpink is terrible so please dont comment on that and i lightened and blurred the shading 00:36, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar...Looking nice. 00:39, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

thanks and i dont know why the box is around it its a png 00:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Something worng my comp. wont let me blur or smudge anything anymore what do i do? 00:44, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded now its working i blurred it 00:48, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, You need to make the background transparent not white. 01:12, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

this is png i dont know why its like that 01:19, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

No it's probably because you didn't make it transparent. I know your work with pixlr, so just take the wand tool and go over the background. ^^ 01:23, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the scar and define the shading. 03:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black. 03:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

ok not really sure what you mean cinder what exactley do i do with the wand tool do i delete the background? what layer do i delete it on? 17:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

My comp. isnt working well so i cant really blur alot so i might take a while to reupload 17:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

and i know i seem stupid but im bad at blurring ear pink so how exactley do i do it and make it good 18:03, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded i know the background im workin with it to make it transparent 18:21, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks to teldy for telling me how to make it clear on the background thanks teldy! 18:55, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Remember to upload over the old file when reuploading. Don't make a whole new file. Rename this Birdpaw.apprentice.png and either brighten the highlights of lighten the base coat. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  19:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar less red. 21:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded the scar is the same color as the earpink now and i added highlights to make the shading "pop" 21:32, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights <span style="">00:11 Sun Jan 22

Re-uploaded the highlights are as bright as the'll get-- 00:59, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. 01:08, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar and can you darken the nose pink just a tad? And I think there is blurred ear lineart, but I can't tell.. >.<  14:35, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

She looks like you just filled her in with black! Add highlights or something. 16:42, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

She does have highlights and there as light as i can get them and her nose is black so i cant darken it-- 17:34, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Add another layer of highlights, perhaps? 17:35, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded i added another ;ayer of highlites.-- 18:07, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's a speck of watse by the tip of the tail.<font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 02:59, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

where do you see the waste sky not bieng sarcastic i just need to know where it is so i can get rid of it-- 22:26, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The ear on <-- side doesn't look completely filled in. 01:30, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded it was overfilled.-- 23:50, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her up a tiny bit. 14:37, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

ok-- 22:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded-- 00:28, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her up some more? I can barely make out the lineart. 03:01, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

i might be able to re-upload it today but probabley tommorow-- 14:53, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar less hot-pink please. <span style="">00:01 Mon Jan 30

There is a waste near the back legs 18:03, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the scar is the same color as the one on her kittypet image and the fur is lightened-- 00:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit more. <span style="">01:42, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

re-uploaded its as light as it will get and still look like a black cat-- 00:01, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, you can still lighten her up a lot. Please do so~ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

You might want to try color picking off Hollyleaf since the shading on the Birdpaw's kittypet image is hard to see too. It might need to be tweaked. 14:47, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (A) ~ For Approval
Fallow's reservation ran out, so I snatched this up. According to the category page, this is the last apprentice image needing to be redone (but there could be more without categories). Woo! Comments? 15:36, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps make the stripes fade out a bit more like the elder and I believe the nose should be grey. Brilliant job like always, Shellheart. 00:17, January 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * I did this to match his warrior image, as the elder image is on the redo list. 00:51, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The elder image shouldn't be on the redo list, the warrior is getting tweaked by simply putting shorthair lineart over the old image, so the elder one doesn't need to be redone. I'm removing it now, so could you make this match the elder now? 05:00, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I was the one who was supposed to do that, I forgot to post it XD Problem solved. 05:06, January 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * Aww, dang it. The warrior image looked so much better than the elder image. (sigh) Fine, I'll do it. 15:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, someone else can take over. I just don't have it in me to copy that pattern when I like this one so much. 20:24, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can i steal this back? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 20:28, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 20:46, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You workin' on this Pouncey? 20:40, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yah, but I'm having computer issues. It'll be posted by Saturday. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I changed to title since you re-uploaded. Blur the shading on the haunch. 17:26, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

My computer still shows Shelly's version o_o Reuploaded... <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 19:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

There it is! Lighten the earpink so it matches the elder. 20:14, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fallow needed me to reupload for her, since she couldn't edit. 02:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a touch more 06:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more. <span style="">08:33, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

Reuploaded <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, and I think it might be ready. Lovely Fallow! 22:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (KP) ~ For Approval
She ate from the twoleg an' everyone else got one... Comments? <span style="">02:19 Sat Jan 28

Can you make that curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. 02:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back a little. 02:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading too, nice job! 06:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose color. 08:07, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">18:38 Sat Jan 28

The lineart for the neck looks a little bit too fat/blotchy. Try copying it from Nettlesplashs or Honeypaws. 19:53, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing, I don't feel like fiddling around with lineart. It never works out. Anyone who wants it, take it :P. <span style="">23:30 Sat Jan 28

I'll take it. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:19, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <span style="">02:27, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Darken the shadings please 17:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart out on the ---> side of her neck. 20:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg. 14:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg and the back a bit more. -- 02:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the shading to my liking. 12:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. 14:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <span style="">00:05 Thu Feb 2

Tone down the "highlights". 20:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I always use highlights. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:25, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Dont really see anything wrong. So, CBA-time! 02:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but can you blur the shading some more? -- 18:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  00:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

...continuing CBA? - 00:43, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but, blur the shading, even if you have to use the blur tool :3 <span style="">01:21 Sat Feb 4

Purple already said the shading is already blurred to the max. Another lead agreed with me on the chat that this looked okay. CBA agaain? 02:15, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Hate to interrupt, but can you darken it a bit to match the warrior image? 06:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

If I darken it more, it will look like black. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  12:44, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading just a tad bit more? And can you colorpick off the warrior image for the earpink? 16:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, with earpink straight from the warrior. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:58, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten/define the ear-pink a bit more? The color from the warrior might've been blurred over so much that the main color had been smudged into the black. Feel free to change the shade a bit. 06:02, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit more? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:57, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Whoa....this is great, but, in my view....Plumwillow was never even seen at the Twoleg nest. We don't really have any evidence that she was, and even though she may have gone with the other cats, it doesn't mean that she actually took any food. 18:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (Lo)~For Approval
Here she is. My first Charart in a long time. Comments? 17:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Whole image lineart is blurred, redone it please ,17:43,January 30,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to do it without redoing the image totally. 17:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little? And on chat last night, we agreed Brook should be either tweaked or redone becase she needs more stripes on her body. On her back leh leg and face especially. Would you be fine with doing that? :) Great work by the way 18:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart's blurred too. 19:23, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The ear-pink is in the wrong side of the ear where we can see it (edit conflicts! How dare it!) 19:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, that was me with the conflicts. Changes not showing. I think the earpink should be forward. Just looks more natural to me. 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and thicken the lineart one pixel at the torn ear. 04:03, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Please say what parts need to be blurred. That would really help. 15:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Try matching the stripes with the warrior version, as in, less smudging, and thicker stripes. Also make the shading more noticable while not overdoing it. So far, nice work! 00:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Atelda, I told her she could change the stripes because on chat we agreed Brook needed more stripes. 02:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you have the smudging go in the direction of her fur a little more and darken the shading? 03:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I love swirled tabbies, which is why I chose this design. Changes not showing. 15:36, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

The fur smudging still isn't going in the direction of the fur. And this actually has less stripes than the other images, so add more. They also look kinda unnatural, like they're paintbrush strokes, not stripes. And try looking at a reference of a swirled tabby to make it more realistic. And if her stripes are gonna be redone anyways, there's no need to keep the color of the other images, so can you make the base coat less ginger? 17:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:30, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner, smudge them, and change the color of the main pelt color and stripes to brown. Right now it looks red. 00:56, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. It's weird. It shows a previous one. Hmmm. 16:05, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it a lot? It's too dark right now. And the stripe pattern still doesn't look very realistic, it looks like brush strikes instead of stripes. 16:23, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

The very first tabby style you uploaded was good. You might want to go back to that style. But instead of rounded point ends, make them narrow out into points a bit (if that makes sense) 03:04, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, her prey-hunter was redone. You'll have to change to stripes. 15:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner image and first image for approval made on GIMP. I love GIMP now though. Any way, here he is! Comments? 19:19, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and tone down the highlights. Excellent! 19:21, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I swear, one more edit conflict and i shall lose it. Any way, i gave him the wrong eye color (don't ask how) So I fixed that also. Comments? 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. This is lovely daddy! <span style="">19:41 Mon Jan 30

Re-uploaded.   I have been discovered! Oh noes! Pshaw, comments? 19:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar some more and make it the same colour as the earpink. 20:50, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nyeh, scar. Your lucky i have the .xcf file Comments? 21:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Pshaw, shading is annoying right now. Any way, comments? 22:33, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more... 18:27, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar stand out. I also don't think it should be so shoop da whoopy. Make it straighter :3 19:16, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. 00:27, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Not half bad, Rain. This is looking excellent. 19:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Cloudy. 18:48, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar thicker and brighter. 18:50, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing, and when they do, i just gotta say ew. 19:09, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the scar a bit more. It looks a bit paintbrushy 06:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner image! I'm in love with this <333 &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 19:34, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are spotz not colored in and can you blur the ear-pink more and add depth to the eyes and define the shading more? 19:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this File:Mist (Lo).loner.png, please. =) It looks good~ 20:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink. I think Mist was my second ever charart! *good times* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 21:30, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are a couple stray white pixles on the belly, the tail, the elbow and the hind leg 00:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

As this is a kit doing this image, I changed the heading. <span style="">03:04, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Well done Oakbreeze! This seems 85% complete to me...I will add you in as an apprentice now, and since I've evaluated this, this is now Up For Approval. 03:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Oakbreeze? 05:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) - For Approval
Comments? Elo legs 20:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the legs just a tad? 21:15, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 00:26, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">03:00 Thu Feb 2

Reuploaded~ Can someone help me with the waste? -- Elork   13:52, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sure..I'll get right to it.. ^^ 02:00, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Removed waste. (I hope xD) The earpink seems a bit too smudged. 02:13, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on her belly looks like a rectangle c: Maybe round it a bit more? 02:32, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Better? -- Elork   03:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. <span style="">01:20, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Wind (Lo) ~ CBA
I really wanted one of the leaders.. xD Well, heres Wind! I got all the colors off of her leader image, so I don't want to hear anything about that. :3 I don't think changes are showing yet. 20:53, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. 20:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the shading. 21:13, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit now x3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 21:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Knew that one was coming xD Blurred the shading. :3 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a little? 23:40, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. >.< 22:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Where exactly is your light source? The shading on her right hind leg looks like it's coming from behind, and the front legs looks like the light's coming from in front. Can you settle on one? :3 04:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Looking good, Misty! 19:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading. I'll fix the light source later. >.< Thanks Cloudy! :D 21:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the light source. 20:44, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and it should be ready. 18:55, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the shading on the tail. 20:17, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nicely done. CBA? 19:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Barley (Lo) ~ CBA
Hmm.. Not one of my favorite chararts, but one of my favorite characters. c: 21:09, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

3: such a beauty I think you're only allowed to have one charart up for approval at a time... (maybe wrong) 21:17, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

She's right. Only one loner image per person. Either this or Wind will have to be declined. 21:26, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

So sorry. Can I decline this one? 22:09, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for being so co-operative. I'll list it as withdrawn so anyone can take over if they want. 22:15, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over! 8D 00:25, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think I know who Oblivion was directing that to...  Define the highlights. 20:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid it completely so I'd have the layers. I'm not sure if the changes are showing.... I tried my best to get the white well shaded without making it gray. 07:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I feel bad CBAing this when I only uploaded it once, but there's been no comments for 24 hours, so.... CBA? 15:02, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, sorry to interrupt, but the patches need to be more solid to match his rogue and kit. You've smudged them too much. 20:04, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, his pupil looks dilated and there wouldn't be a light source underneath his tail. 18:00, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Since eye style is the artist's choice and I rather like this style, I'm keeping it this way, but I fixed everything else. (though changes aren't showing yet I don't think) 09:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 20:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Cinders (Lo) ~ For Approval
I love Cinders, comments? 21:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? Loverly. 21:58, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:01, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the transitions between the patches. 22:07, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:49, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the one on the belly so it's more consistent. 03:52, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you defne the earpink? I can barely see it. 16:45, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It might be your computer Bluestar. 21:25, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad? 01:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:53, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten the earpink a tad like the queen? 05:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I took the earpink from the queen. 12:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. 19:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:11, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (Lo) ~ For Approval
This is uggy Dx Comments? 23:57, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's lovely :3 Define the ear pink. 00:00, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. Excellent ^^ 00:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. >:D 00:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Psssh. This ain't uggy XP Define the earpink. 03:32, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Aww, thanks Mounty <3 20:20, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, I can hardly see the lineart 23:42, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:53, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little. Rowan, I love this. 8D 15:45, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks <3 Re-Uploaded. 17:41, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink fill the capacity and either darken/define the shading or brighten/define the "highlights" 01:10, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 19:37, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I can barely see the earpink, try taking it from one of her other images. 20:59, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Speckletail (Lo) ~ For Approval
Certainly not one of my favorites. Comments? 06:31, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and make them more wavy. 16:10, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to while doing my best to match the old loner image. 03:13, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit lighter. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 03:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you match the elder image a bit? <span style="">06:25 Thu Feb 2

There's a bit of waste on the front leg <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:09, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Half her images are one color and half are another, so do you want the hex codes from the warrior so then that will be one less tweak later on? XD 20:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo)~For Approval
Daisy's loner image. My first charart. Comments?

I de-thumbed it for you, remove all the waste and rename it File:Daisy.loner.png, or just upload it ove rthe old file. 20:59, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Also, make it transparent. 21:01, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

And move the ear pink over. 21:48, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

And the image is kinda pixelated. 21:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be me, but I can hardly see the shading. 22:47, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

@Silvah, the ear-pink can be on either side. 22:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Change it to a png image. <span style="">02:42, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

You'll have to redo the image, I think. Because of the file format, it's made the lineart look slightly blurred and the overall image is somewhat pixely. 18:58, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I know Moonshine is an apprentice, but I thought the 80% done rule applied to everybody? Don't take this the wrong way Moonshine, but I believe you should practice a little and then put this back up. 18:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it still applies, but as long as an image is 50% complete, which I believe this is, then it has a week to improve. Then it can be declined. I'll work with Moon on this and hopefully it can stay up. 00:41, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this Daisy.loner.png 05:57, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Egg (Lo) ~ For Approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlinks and blur them ,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺<font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="4" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~<font color="orange" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">L <font color="yellow" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="green" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) ~ For Approval
The ear needed to be torn since he was a loner when he was decribed with it. Comments? 01:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripe a small bit? 01:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, as well. 04:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You're not allowed to have to chararts up at once anymore. You're gonna have to withdraw one of them. If you keep this one, darken the shading. 07:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Please pick one or I will choose one at random to decline. Right now, you're pretty much ensuring that you can do both of your images. Just a heads up, alright? 18:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I want this one withdrawing the other 01:12, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit. 17:24, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Woody (Lo) ~ For Approval
This is the correct title? It is from what I saw in the guidelines... First charart...;3; I know it's not that good...comments?? 03:37, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Very good. 90% complete, thus changing this to "For Approval", as I have evaluated, and Willowfern will now become an apprentice. 03:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

His description says he's shaggy. Can you add some lineart on the fur like Yellowfang's image? 03:47, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Of course. Also, thank you, Stoneclaw. :) Reuploaded 03:56, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some. Good first image! 05:39, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivyheart. :) Reuploaded 02:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eye, again, this is amazing @Willowfern! Possibly add shaggy parts to the legs and/or legs. 02:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Once again, thanks Stoneclaw. :) Reuploaded 02:20, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

To me, the highlights (or light sorce if you don't use highlights) almost look tinted green to me. When using brown, make sure it doesn't have too much yellow in it ^^ 19:11, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, this is really your first charart? Very nice! Well, I know Ivy already mentoined it, but i think he is whole a tad greenish, or its just my,dear PC? ,20:39,Febreary 2,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink go down a bit more and blur it. 17:29, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink placement is fine, just blur it. <span style="">18:28 Sun Feb 5

Fritz (PO3) (Lo) ~ CBA
I based the pattern after a loved one, so, I'd rather not change it. :3 03:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the body by the closest back leg. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 04:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <3 04:31, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Daww. <3 One side of the torn ear looks a little too thin and spiky. 03:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:32, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

B'aww. He looks almost exactly like my cat <3 I think you might be able to blur the earpink a tad. 10:45, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Not being mean, but the smudges don't follow the direction cats' fur usually go, could you tweak that? And make the shading more grey and less periwinkle... 21:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

If a cat's fur doesn't go from their head to their tail, then which way is it supposed to go? Unless you mean the ankles, then please specify that so she knows what exactly to fix. The smudges on the torso is fine to me 23:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I am talking about the ankles. It seems like everybody hates me. 00:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading's black. I really can't darken black. =P 14:30, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good to me, CBA? 20:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yay, I get to do another Yellowfang image! Comments? 04:33, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I love this cat. XD Can you define the shading a little more? :3 04:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Gosh dangit I was going to do this :P Lighten her tail some. 04:35, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gotta be faster, Ivy! 15:50, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad, and where's your light source? 15:00, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I'm handing this off to Ivystripe. 23:51, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

As discussed, I'm taking this over ^^ Will reupload in a sec 23:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? 18:07, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

I absolutly love this Ivy!! ^^ I think there's some waste at the torn ears. Define the shading on the tail. 18:10, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading. >8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 02:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Where? Her torso? Or everything? 03:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind 20:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur shading a tad =3 <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺<font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="4" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~<font color="orange" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">L <font color="yellow" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="green" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 21:04, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Where? That's what I just did  21:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Jingo (Lo)- CBA
Jingo (again). Woo! Comments? 00:05, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

8O Y u so good Teldy *is jelly* Define the shoulder shading. 01:16, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Crop the image :3 Beautiful. <span style="">02:56 Thu Feb 2

In her kittypet image, it looks like she has a longer tail, unless the tip of her tail was omitted in the charart (I dunno). If She did have the tip of her tail removed in it, can you make the tail a weeny bit loner? Beautiful work ;-;  19:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure what she's saying up there... but could you make the tail longer, since it was only the tip, not half of her tail?

I forgot to sign. 00:17, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful. CBA? 20:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yay! First loner! Comments? ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:21, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful! ^^ Tone down the highligh, if there is one, on the haunch. 22:23, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I always use highlights, Mountain. ;) ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:28, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Arrrrggghhhh, I wanted to do this! Blur the shading just a touch. 00:13, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gotta be faster next time! ;) ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:01, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the collar ^^ 03:36, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:01, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Crop the pic around the lineart please. ,11:53,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Q) ~ For Approval
Like a middle manager! >8D But really, convo for this is on the talk page. I edited the lineart to make her not-pregnant looking... so essentially, behold my image of Squirrelflight laying down! Comments? 00:27, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is..so purdy 8DDD Can you add some more stripes to the flank pretty please? 00:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

<333 Can you blur the flank stripes a tad also? 00:31, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! ^^ Can you blur all the stripes a bit actually? And as for the lineart, it seems a bit like her chest is sticking out a bit too much at the bottom. Like there's flab or something. Could you get rid of the little bit? :) 00:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I trimmed her down a bit more. Her back wouldn't be arching so much when she isn't pregnant or nursing. And I would add more stripes, but that'd deviate from her already established design. 02:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but can you move her pupil more to the centre? She looks like she's freaked out about something beside her xD Other than that, beautiful. 02:41, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'd actually rather leave them as is. I kinda wanted to make her look guilty, and I guess freaked out works as well. 03:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Well all righty then c: Tear her ear. 03:39, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out that lump in the middle of her back and raise her hindquarters. Breeze whisker  05:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you redline the hindquarters thing? I'm not sure what you mean. 05:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

That was badly phrased. Sorry. But I kinda meant to like make the hindquarters more rounded. I'd think with the lack of the belly, her weight would shift to lie less on her stomach and more on her haunches. Can you kinda see what I mean with this guy? I certainly don't envy you with this tweak. XD The anatomy changes a lot in a pregnant cat.. Breeze whisker  06:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Ahh, yup, I got it. Thanks. 06:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that?

The hind foot looks a little weird in that position. Move the hind foot a little over <--- side, even if it's only a little bit. 18:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the haunch lineart is kind of thick at the bottom. Thin it out to two pixils wide. Looking pretty good thar Ms. Shelly! 19:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Taper the tail up by the base. Maybe also make the hip a bit pointier towards the top; a bit too round with the more slender back. 02:22, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart at the bottom of the chin looks a bit thick. Thin it out by a pixel or two. 17:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Splash (lo) - For Approval
Reposting 8D 06:23, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Pretty ^^. 13:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the haunch shading. 05:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Pod (Lo) ~ For Approval
Woot! I snagged another one! Comments? 14:16, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. 14:21, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. =3 15:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the muzzle a little. 16:09, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes are showing now. 17:32, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:39, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bettah? 18:49, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Well done, blur the muzzle a tad more, and the ear-pink and define the shading a tad. 02:32, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing. 03:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 04:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some scars around his muzzle, since he was described with a scarred muzzle. 04:47, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good to me, but yeah you should add the scars -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  04:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

'''TIGERHEART! '''Dont mentoin the same things, please learn to read, yes? ,11:58,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Mothflight (Lo) - For Approval
Woohoo, my favourite, first MC, comments? ,14:31,February 4,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest/stomach area. 16:33, February 4, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded ,19:20,February 4,2012 (UTC)

Socks (Lo) - For Approval
Ew, he's so ugly now that I made him D: Comments? <span style="">22:48 Sat Feb 4

Darken the base color. He looks gray. 22:52, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Was off his old loner image but ok. *Shrugs* <span style="">23:35 Sat Feb 4

It looks great :), nice job... I might blur the earpink just a little more Tiger  heart  ♥  23:42, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Reminds ne of my cat. 8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  02:21, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, next time, please do not just post compliments, post something constructive as well, unless there's been no other comments for 24 hours. Smudge the earpink a little bit more. 04:41, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ok Sweet, i know its only small thing but the white parts looks gray to me, can you lighten them a little please? 11:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think they're white, but if someone else agrees, I will change it. <span style="">18:24 Sun Feb 5

Ruby (Lo) Under Evaluation
http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/4/44/More_ruby.png Alright, there she is... comments?

Tiger heart  ♥  01:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading, make sure the ear-pink fill the ear capacity, and erase the pink that's spilling from the lineart 01:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less hotpink, make it the same as her kit charart. <span style="">01:44 Sun Feb 5

Sure I'll reupload it in a second Tiger heart  ♥  01:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Tiger heart  ♥  01:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is still not 50% complete. Suggesting for deletion again. Get this to at least 50% completiong before uploading this again. 02:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, I suggest you look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement and blurring  02:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Thank you -- Tiger heart  ♥  02:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and I looked at the tutorials (thanks, Ivy) Tiger  heart  ♥  02:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading and fix the pixels on the paws, fill 'em in. 03:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay; Re-uploaded --☯ Tiger heart  ♥  03:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) It looks like some of the lineart on the legs and belly are blurred, possibly erase the extra pixels around it.
 * 2) Make the earpink the same colour and smudge it.
 * 3) Fill in the grey pixels on her feet and tail.
 * 4) Blur the shading LOTS . 05:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Er. Instead of the file archive, could you post the actual image? 05:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Redone -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't upload a new file each time you change it. Re-upload it over File:Ruby.loner.png. 05:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

OKay -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to blur the shading tons. Try using guassion blur under filters. There are also white pixels on the front paw closest to us. <span style="">08:26, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

You also still need to post the actual image, no the archive of it. And I don't think this is 80% complete, so you have a week to improve it before it's declined I believe. 08:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There are light pixels on the front paw, shadings are only applied not blurred, blurred lineart, some colours (ear-pink) are on the places where they can't be- this is all things they are wrong.. fix that 11:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ For Approval
Ew. Comments? 02:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is bootyful Stoney <3 Can you give her a white muzzle and chest like her elder? 02:09, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya blur some of the mottles like the elder? <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 02:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It's awesome, but could look a bit more like an elder by blurring the mottles. Nice job, though, it looks so good

Tiger heart  ♥  02:40, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, please don't repeat comments if they've already been said. 05:56, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad <3  Elork   14:44, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more~ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There was waste. 20:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sol's Father (Lo) - For Approval
Woo, here he is again. Oh, and I'm also proud to say that his old image was the very last loner image to be approved with the old blank -confetti- Anyway, comments? :3 04:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

*checked the file history* The legs look white, though, it may be my computer. Tone down the "highlights" (if there are any) 04:40, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 04:51, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't tell anyone, but I forgot the earpink >.> 22:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt.W) - For Approval
Was my last post of this approved, declined or just deleted? I don't see it in any of the archives... So am I okay to re-post this? <span style="">08:18, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

I think you are :), well darken the shadings a tad. Nice. 12:07,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Ice (Alt. Lo) - For Approval
The collar looks too bulky to me, and hope you don't mind if I changed the pattern a little... Comments? 17:12, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It matches better with the manga picture, so, I'd leave the pattern as is. Move the collar down a bit towards his shoulders and thin out the lineart around the edges, and define the ear-pink 17:14, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think it has to match the manga... 17:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Why is there black stuff on t his collar? 20:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh goodness, I thought this was Snake finally going up again. XD Anyways, I don't know if the changes are showing, but the collar still needs to be moved closer to the shoulder if they are, and yes, it does need to match the manga, though maybe not exactly, at least a bit, and the rogue did so can you keep that pattern? 20:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

...can someone show me how he looks? I don't have the manga, so I don't know. 22:30, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Skywatcher (Lo) - For Approval
Woohoo! Had so much fun doing Kinky, I had to do another fuzzy kitty. Comments? 19:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You used the female blank. 19:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lol. Thanks, Moonleaf XP 19:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

...does this mean I have to re-tweak the elder to match this? 20:13, February 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * I was going to go with the fact that with this charart, he's been living as a loner without being properly fed or groomed, so he'd probably not look as sleek as he does in his elder. I don't think you would, but if another lead disagrees or if you want to, go ahead. 21:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)