Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Mothwing (W) - Redone
The next one on her lineup. Redone to match the MC. Comments? 00:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the artist before you? And maybe add some more stripes so it matches the medicine cat image .Blur the ear pink, too Guradian1098 01:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I don't know and tbh I don't care. I can't add anymore stripes because I don't know where to put them, but I will blur the ear pink. 01:17, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It took me a few seconds to look up the OA of this image. 02:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, I'm not you, and for your information, this project is concerned for the welfare of images and not for OAs. 02:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Icestorm, it's not that big of a deal and I thought we were supposed to say the OA anyway? Lighten the shading on her flank a tad. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Does it really matter who the OA is? Sometimes, it's hard to tell, 'cause most of these were moved from other file names. 02:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have shading on the flank. Do you mean the midriff? 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Flank = the area where your kidneys are. Judging by its location in a human, as well as Brackenfur's scar, I'd say it's where the shading is too dark. 02:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ohfail. I was thinking the My Little Pony flanks...where they have their cutie marks...yeahsorry XD 02:54, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink a bit. 19:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there's some smudged lineart on the tail; fix that. 06:09 Sun Oct 30

Re-Uploaded: Lightened shading on flank, blurred back shading, blurred earpink. Where is the smudged lineart? The lineart is perfectly fine. 14:29, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there waste all around the image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not. There is waste all around it. 16:49, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 10:14 Mon Oct 31

And blur the ear-pink too. 17:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Icey, you still working on this? 18:08, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. I'll be working on this, its just my internet is failing me. 146.115.179.113 23:45, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Wildy though, the earpink does need to be lightened. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same color as her MC. (Icy) 146.115.179.113 23:27, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, honestly, that should have been changed too. IT's REALLY red. If it was only a little red, I'd get over it, but it bothers me when it this over-red. Please change it? *puppy dog eyes* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:25, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I can't work on this anymore. Life is being really hard. Please don't decline it anybody - can someone take over? 146.115.179.113 17:00, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I will. :3 00:15, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not as brilliant as Icy, but here we go. :p 01:18, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work. Darken the tail shading. 01:23, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Preety! Blur the "M" (I think that's what it is xD) on her forhead. 00:16, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dx 01:36, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (R) ~ Redone
OA was Goldenpaw, needed to be gray-brown. Comments? 21:14, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

As lovely as this is, it needs to match Shellheart's version. 21:16 Sat Nov 5

Isn't Shelly supposed to do this? I just relized. 21:18, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, she is. I assumed she had already given you permission to do it, but if you ask her and she says yes, you can do it. 21:29 Sat Nov 5

Yes, you can do it if you want, but it'll be hard to match my stripes with the mud in the way... you sure you want to try? 21:59, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will try. 22:01, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then, you need to work with the colors off of my image. Also, I gave her a marbled tabby pattern, and I believe she was still wearing mud as a rouge because she was still in the mountains and was probably still using it so she wouldn't be caught by eagles. 00:53, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink too? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:31, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. blah... 16:15, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

You got the pattern right, but the stripes should be sharpened. I barely blurred them on the cave-guard image. 16:22, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Make them more hard-edged and darken the earpink just slightly. 03:30 Mon Nov 7

Also, lighten it a bit. Looks like you worked form the shaded part of my charrt. 17:39, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

I am withdrawing this. Sorry, might not be able to get on everyday these days. 00:54, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Taking over since this was supposed to be mine in the first place. Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:07, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mud streaks. 00:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thr mud is blurred enough - 02:08, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the mud a bit. 03:06, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mon, Bloo just said the mud is fine. 23:00, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (W) - Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Echoheart. Comments? 23:36, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. 12:27, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:46, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. 23:35, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink/brighten it. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:04, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:31, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular please. 11:53, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. 21:14, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate earpink >.> 01:22, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable. 02:06, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight and make the shading on the tail look less like a lighter tail tip. 17:33, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:49, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and redden and center the ear pink. 21:11, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shading is fine, Sandstorm. >.>;;; Define the ear pink. 21:12, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Q) - Redone
OA was Sandstar12. Her color was incorrect, again on the list to be redone. I tried a slightly different angle as to where the light source is coming from. Comments for improvement? 18:44, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! Can you define the shoulder highlight/shading and blur the tail shading? 22:56, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:03, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading? 11:57, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

She should be a tiny bit redder. 01:47, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Colors taken off her warrior. 15:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also Reuploaded 15:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

If you look at the three images side by side, yours is a little bit oranger than the others. You don't have to change it if you don't want to, but if you don't change it now, it could be tweaked again in the future. Just a suggestion. 17:17, November 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * shrug* It looks the same to me but I guess I can  17:36, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing - Tweaked
I shoulda redone this shouldnt I? Tell me if I should, anywhoo OA= Nightfall101 and I made her a shorthair - 23:45, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, re-do it. Its shading is really blotchy. 23:46, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it. We don't have an issue. Bloo, those that need to be done as another pelt length are ones you don't need to ASK to redo. 23:47, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yea, I know. And srry it took so long - 00:04, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the ear-pink a tad. 12:07, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 18:27, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Darken and blur the shading. 01:48, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 05:06, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed to have stripes. OA was Sandstar12. 02:44 Wed Nov 9

Darken the shading & brighten the highlights(if you use them) - 03:02, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't use highlights, but darkened shading. 22:47 Wed Nov 9

Darken the shading just a tad more? -- 23:38, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable. 02:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Wild? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, yes, I'm still working on this, but I'm on Vancouver Island and can't access my files. I'll probably be able to reupload this on Monday. 22:41 Sun Nov 13

Hawkfoot (Q) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be fixed. OA was Hawkfire I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:11, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Paleclaw! Define the shading a little bit on the tail. 03:18, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Might as well define the shadiing on the whole image a bit - 21:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:35, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I can barely see it. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfrost (W) ~ Tweaked
Technically, I redid it, but, everythig was on the same exact image. There was a tiny bit of blurred lineart, the shading...didn't even look like shading and the black and white needed to be blended a little better. I adore black and white cats<3 19:48, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

As far as I can see, OA is Sandy. 19:48, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, especially on the white parts. 20:04, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have two different layers of shading: one for the black and one for the white. Layers are a lifesaver. 20:14, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm too pro to use them :P. Lighten the black a tad. (Moonleaf) 74.198.9.247 22:00, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Moonleaf, hush. =P 'Re-uploaded. 22:02, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

The front paw seems a little light. Darken, if any, the shading? :3 23:35, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

I can't darken the shading anymore. If I add another layer, it'll just look funky. 18:31, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading look more like shading... Right now, it just looks like he went from being black-and-white to black-and-pale gray. 01:50, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Might as well just redo the shading then. And by the way, that's WHITE on his pelt, not pale gray. I just have the shading too dark. 01:52, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

That's exactly what I meant O_O 01:54, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Half-asleep Cloudy shouldn't go on the PCA pages...she doesn't read things correctly. Sorry 'bout that. xD 03:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading. 21:01, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the smudging on the patches. 22:55 Sun Nov 13

I think the patches look fine. 00:51, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Also, they're not patches. I followed the style of the previous Crowfrost image. 00:51, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) - Redone
Redone to be dark cream without stripes. 00:41, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Flamingomom, and the color is from Daisy. 00:42, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, it's very blotchy. 146.115.179.113 00:48, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the earpink. 00:49, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes might not be showing. 00:51, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Another stole my reservation. >.> I am sorry but I reserved this first, and I even checked the revision history. It is not fair to me. 01:05, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. Would you mind if I did this, or would you rather do it yourself? I know what it feels like when someone steals my reservation, but I also know what it feels like to do a charart that takes a long time, put a lot of effort into it, and have to decline it, but it is yours, so if you want, I'll remove it. 01:09, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, I can't make you remove it, it would make me guilty, umm, keep doing it, it looks great! ^^ 01:12, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :3 You can do her kit version if you want, I won't reserve it. 01:14, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely, thicken and darken the shading. 18:41, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a little green on my computer... maybe make her a tad more cream? 03:08, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rosepetal (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows, I had permission from Mistystar to do this. Needed to be dark cream, comments? 01:45, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes green, Like Mistystar's warrior version, and define the tail shading. Nice! 02:44, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize the earpink a little? -- 06:24, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:29, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to bug you about this once more, but can you dim the eyecolor to match the other version? XD 04:37, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:48, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Flowerstar (W)- tweaked
I forgot I had to do this one too. So anywhoo I did the same thing as her leader image, burned in stripes. Commentss? - 19:00, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the 'M' on her forehead. 19:35, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I just realized, I posted this up on 11-11-11 at 11:00AM. Holy craap 8D - 19:49, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I know you weren't called to do this, but can you blur the shading? It's very hard edged. 20:53, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the chest. 00:12, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Clawface (W) - Tweaked
OA was Sandy, tweaked by Maplepool. The shading was really oddly placed, so I redid that. The scars were also oddly coloured, so I tweaked those. And the earpink looked off to me, so I tweaked that as well. There was also blurred lineart on his ear :3 04:23, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! Can you make the earpink and scars the same color though? It's up to you which color you use, but they should match. Also, any chance of you trying to add some shading to the scars? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:25, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! :) It kind of looks like he's bleeding now, though O_O And I added shading to the scars, but it's really hard to tell because they're so thin. 04:38, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm.... I absolutely luv the way you made the scars, but they seem kind of...dark? Idk, perhaps lighten earpink and the scars, or maybe just the edges.... Eh, whatever you want to do. :3 04:43, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Clawyy <3 Could you blur the shading near the haunch a little more? 17:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Now this I like :D 17:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink and maybe make the scars a paler pink color to make them look old. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:16, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, blur it, and blur the shading. 22:58 Sun Nov 13

Thin out the shading on the tail and on the neck. Also maybe make the scars thicker and blur it maybe? You dont have to, just a suggestion/ - 01:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Timberfur (D) - Redone
I'm surprised no-one re-did him yet. Original artist was Mousetalon, and he needed to be longhaired. 18:34, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make him greying? It says in his page that he is. 18:47, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't sure if his whole body was greying, so I just added a greying muzzle. 18:54, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'd maybe define the muzzle more and maybe make it lighter. 00:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:19, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pupil? 02:43, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

There's a pupil >_>. There was a discussion about it, and it was agreed this eye style was okay. 02:52, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

River (Lo) - Redone
I have been simply dying to see this one redone. Two pieces of prey with one blow. Loner and one of the founding leaders. OA was Insane. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Erased the waste around the back. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:52, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 03:13, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 15:06, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's blotchy... If you use GIMP, I suggest using Gaussian Blur instead of the Smudge Tool. It makes it look a lot better :) 16:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I use photoshop. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sunstar (D) - Tweaked
Ripped his ear. OA is Insaneular, then given yellow eyes by Ivystripe. Sky-Stupidly Spring...✿ 03:11, November 13, 2011 (UTC

Blur the shading a lot. 06:26, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur the shading without ruining the other stuff. Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 12:05, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart on the tear. 14:06, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 01:51, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Archeye (W) - Tweaked
I dont know if its redone or tweaked, I redoned stripes and shadings.. OA was Insaneular.. Leaf-storm,14:11,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Ups, changes arent showing Leaf-storm,14:13,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Why is the lineart in between his haunch and his tail gone? 16:08, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That's the old version. 16:21, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

i dont like when changes arent showing Leaf-storm,16:48,November 13,2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list, but could you make the ear-pink less purple. 22:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (E) ~ Tweaked
Lineart Fail, but I honestly didn't think this needed to be redone. OA was Scarletwind tweaked by Moonflight, and it needed ragged fur and a flattened muzzle. 14:31, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! I see nothing wrong :) 16:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Personally, I think his fur would look a bit more like his father's. Other than that, look great. 00:26, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) - Tweaked
Blurred shadings and added some more, OA is Bramble Leaf-storm,14:53,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the shading on her paws. 16:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:30,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the neck shading and lighten the shading on the middle of the haunch. Blur all shading. <span style="">22:59 Sun Nov 13

Poolcloud (Q) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow, and the shading and markings needed to be redone. 18:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink and blur the patches a lot. 19:44, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink and patches look fine to me, darken the shading a little bit - 19:47, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the patches look a tad prickly. Blur it a little bit. The whole ear looks pink, define the edges of it. Looking good =) 21:31, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thats how she does the earpink XD - 21:41, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno the earpink looks... off. I don't think it should fill the whole ear. <span style="">23:00 Sun Nov 13

The earpink filling the whole ear is epic. Blur the shading on the tail. -- 01:25, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
Added longer tail. Original artist was Sandy, redone by Scarlet. Comments? Elorisa  18:24, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks a little odd... When I added it to the list, I pictured it being expanded at the middle, so that it was roughly the same shape, but longer. Make sense? 18:28, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded; Better? ''' Elorisa   18:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, perfect :) 18:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip of the tail a bit pointier and erase the waste around the tail. <span style="">22:45 Sun Nov 13

Leafpool (Ki)- Redone
She needed to match the other images... OA was Darkhallows. Constructiments? 19:32, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her paws a bit. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 00:36, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) ~ Redone
Needed long hair and OA was Icethroat21. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:00, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

You need to upload it over Dawnflower's elder image, I believe. :3 22:23, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Debating whether I should do that or not when I was uploading it... I'll switch it right now. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   23:38, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and lighten the haunch shading. 01:09, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

And redden the earpink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 01:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading and fixed the haunch shading and reddened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   02:01, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Rock (Ro) - Redone
I guess I changed my mind. Original artist was Moonflight, and it needed to be more brown. 01:08, November 14, 2011 (UTC)