Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Leafstar (L) ~ Tweaked
OAs were Bramble and Paleclaw. She needed to be paler. Comments? Sha dew  ing!  00:32, July 10, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

There's not much visible difference, I think she should still be lightened more. If it would make it easier for you, I still have the file for this image and could send it to you if you'd like. If not, just go ahead and lightened this a bit more.

Still working? 03:36, 07/15/2013

Yes! So sorry, it'll be re-uploaded soon! 23:07, July 15, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded I tried my best on it. I'm sorry, I'm not really quite sure how I'm supposed to do this. Comments? 23:24, July 15, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

A suggestion would be to ask Paleh for the file and tweak it from that, but it needs to be a more light brown. x3 15:48, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Still working on this? 00:36, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

It's actually been a week since this was first posted and it hasn't been completed. Declining. 12:00 Sat Jul 20

If there's no objections, I'd like to take over on this. o3o 14:01, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Taking over, OA be Paleh, tweaked for paleness, and colorpicked from the kittypet. 22:21, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reedfeather(De) - Tweaked
Tweaked for the fur, OA was Specklestream, this looks horrible, I know, I had trouble doing it. 20:13, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this, because it looks really bad, and I think someone could do better. x3 Sorry! 21:34, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over, if there's no objections. ouo 21:38, 07/15/2013

Re-uploaded Here we go. I tried. Reasons for tweaking and OA are up there.^  21:57, 07/15/2013

Define the shading a bit? Looks a bit flat. 01:34, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 00:37, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Eh, I tried. 15:43, 07/20/2013

Pinestar (L) ~ Tweaked
OAs be Trolly, Mistystar, Iceheart and Sandwhich, tweaked for muzzle scars. Comments? 01:56, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

The scars look a bit too pixel-y. Could you smooth them out a little more? 00:56, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. 02:09, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Sparrowkit(Ki) - Redone
redone for multiple reasons oa is leafstrike, comments? 02:03, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Rain That Passes Quickly (TB) - Tweaked
OA was Wild, smudged the speckles, defined the shading. Comments? 02:03, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Goosefeather (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA's be Mounty and moi, and was tweaked to have ragged fur and such. 02:29, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

As said before, can you make the fur something other than black?

Reuploaded  22:19, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (Ro) ~ Redone
Redone to match the others. Comments? 05:29, 20, 07, 2013

I have a layer of brownish-reddish fur texture over her, especially her patches of ginger  00:10, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Goosefeather (E) ~ Tweaked
I'm sorry I ruined this gorgeous image ;-; I had to add another layer of shading to keep depth after doing the fur oa was like Shelly I think tweaked to add fur oddities. 11:31 Sat Jul 20

Can you make the tufts of fur not black, like they are on Runningnose's MC image? 00:10, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Goosefeather (MC) ~ Tweaked
same as elder 11:57 Sat Jul 20

There seem to be a few pixels of uncolored space near the tail tip, chest and belly fur, and is it just me, or is there a section on the tail without lineart? On the side closest to the back near the tip? 20:35, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Gorseclaw (TC) (Star) - Tweaked
Oa was some noob called BlueDeino; tweaked for spiky fur. 08:41 Sun Jul 21

Gorseclaw (TC) (Ki) - Tweaked
Oa was Stoner; tweaked for spiky fur. 08:45 Sun Jul 21

Crowfrost ~ Tweaked
Oa be Sandstar12, tweaked by several users, latest redone by Skt. Tweaked to make paws less gray. 20:22, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Jake (KP) ~ Redone
OA be me and I tried to make him look more like Firestar. ouo

Blur the edges of the solid coloured muzzle? Wow, this is amazing; where the heck did Firestar's twin come from??? 21:33, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

I did blur it. ouo I think it's fine, because if it's blurred much more, it'll start to fade into the rest of the image. Also, thank you~!

Brook (Ki) ~ Redone
/never again/. Comments? 23:16, 07/21/2013

She looks like she is pale brown and I don't think we have a choice on the darkness or paleness of a character if it's never said. The stripes also look a little thick for a kit, to me anyway. 23:20, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Forgot to say reasons for being redone: Stripes didn't flow well with the body. OA was Rainaroo.

She's a classic tabby, so the stripes are going to be thick. As for the darkness/paleness not being stated, a lot of chararts could be pointed out for not being the neutral shade of their base coat's color if it's not stated. o3o 23:25, 07/21/2013

I agree with Ivy on the paleness, many chararts have been tweaked or redone because they haven't looked like the color they were specified as which, and this is more white than brown, so I think that it could be darkened a bit. Also, white bellies and paws aren't allowed unless cited, it has to be a paler version of the main base belt. 01:11, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Brook (PH) ~ Redone
Ferk let me have this and choose the pattern. Most recent OA was Loonie, and redone because the stripes didn't flow very well. Comments? 23:20, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Brook (W) ~ Redone
Redone because stripes didn't flow well, most recent OA be Loonie. doing sets is fun~  00:38, 07/22/2013