Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 64

Ice (Alt R)-Approved
heres Ice as he is in "A clan In Need". Comments? Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 23:29, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Iceheart already has this up for approval. 23:39, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Before you post something, check to make sure the information you are putting is absolutely correct. I do believe Iceheart had Snake up for approval, who is Ice's brother. Moreover, I've just approved Snake. -- 23:42, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Darken the shading a bit and blur the ear pink-- 23:46, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry Bramble. I thought Iceheart had Ice up. Blur the ear-pink. 23:51, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, i did Snake. Make the first stripe darker or blurr the second (i had the same problem). Maybe make the nose grey, because it's on the black fur. 00:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back and belly shading. 16:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Uploader's not working for me. :( Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 03:26, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a little less hot pinky. 18:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, less hot-pink. Also, make it bigger. 20:30, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

It is not hot-pink. But I agree, make the ear-pink bigger. 20:34, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded fixed most but like I said The uploader wasn't working. Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 00:37, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely :) But the collar spikes are weird. Also, darken the black patches. 23:13, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

The first black patch now is wierd, sorry. Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 00:34, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. In fact, everything except the tail-shading looks wonderful. Blur the shading on the tail a bit, though. 02:28, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about now? is it good enough? Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 02:42, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ehh, I still think you should make the black darker. 03:44, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

When I do that it looks like a black stripe with gray sides. this is as dark as I can allow it to be with out looking crazy. Sorry.Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 22:45, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks great. Don't darken the stripe any more, and yes, Fiercestar, the tail looks good. 01:40, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Maybe lighten the ear pink a tad. Out Page

Reuploaded Lightened ear pink. Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 19:17, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, does Ice need reinforced dog claws? I'm not sure. :P 17:09, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Snake got the claws, so i think he does to. Add some big claws 17:11, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded added claws, but look Here. you see any claws. It doesnt matter if his brother has them. Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 20:24, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Try adding a bit more white by the flank. 23:30, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Where? On the leg, or on the side?<span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 23:33, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome job! The only thing I can see is that the back hind leg looks kinda flat, so maybe add some extra shading at the very top of it, where the leg meets the belly. I think it'd be darker there. 23:26, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the hind leg nearest to the tail (Sorry xD) 00:28, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed.<span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 20:52, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't the nose supposed to be pink? 15:38, September 26, 2010 (UTC)\

Nope, cuz there's black around the nose so he'd have a black nose. 21:17, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, the name needs to be changed to Ice.rogue.alt.png.-- 05:46, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Quite right; making the change as I approve this. -- 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (W) - For Approval
I hope this looks alright! My fourth charart! :) Comment for approval? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:04, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading a bit, center the earpink and desaturate it. 01:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and darken the shading. 01:39, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:51, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger and blur them. =) 20:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little lighter. 22:02, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:07, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes look sorta unatural, but maybe thats just me. <span style="color:black; background:lightgreen; border:3px dashed violet; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:violet">Sunny <span style="color:Goldenrod;background:lightblue;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 2em; color:violet;">Yes O Great One, I shall do as you command...22:42, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 23:55, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, it does look a bit un-natural. Maybe you should try another style of tabby? But again. might just me. 15:13, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

yes also there is a pixel on his chest that is not colored in <font color="Violet">Mossleap <font color="Orange">You burnt my ice cream!!!  18:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I was just trying to get the stripes to match up with the design on his medicine cat charart. But if you all think they need to be redone, I'll give it a go. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 19:17, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I re-did the tabby pattern... What do you think? Comments? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 19:37, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I like how his stripes are now, make the ear pink a bit smaller. 19:50, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ends of the stripes sharper. 19:53, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink as well. 20:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:31, September 12, 2010 (UTC).

Lighten it to match the first color image. Sorry. :P That one is the same color as Pebbleheart's other image. 20:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear-pink bigger. :) 20:47, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected, except for the ear pink. I think it's big enough... ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:03, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:52, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:39, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten him a bit, so he matches his warrior image. 05:26, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:36, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's beautiful, but define the stripes a bit more =) 02:33, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected! :) 21:57, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and lighten it-- 17:50, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 21:42, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's a little too light now, make it more reddish. -- 03:16, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the ear-pink should be biggger. On your first image, the ear-pink is bigger than it is now. 12:24, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 13:58, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is way too bright. 17:08, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 20:00, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

It looks red to me, though it might just be my computer. 02:15, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. Sorry, but updates will start coming more slowly. School's getting more complicated and I have Stage crew. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:27, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and make it a bit lighter as well. 23:29, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. I got the color from his medicine cat charart, but I'll re-do it if you think i should. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 00:17, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger and put it closer to the ear, it isn't very close to the ear now. 03:25, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 23:08, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the highlight on the face. This is really good :) 00:29, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

re-uploaded and corrected. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:52, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. I lightened up the image. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 22:42, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I love this image though, its quite dark compared to his other images, I suggest lightening it a bit. Blur the earpink a little bit as well. -- 22:06, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, it's a bit dark compared to his mc charart. But idk how to lighten it without having having to do the whole charart over again. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:18, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and corrected. Well, I tried to lighten it up a bit. Idk if it looks really bad... ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 03:41, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

I really love this image. :) Add one more stripe on his tail. 15:33, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

It has the same number of tail stripes as his med. cat image. I think this looks great. CBA? 17:41, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

What does CBA mean? ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

CBA, means: Comments before approval --Dawnleaf 02:39, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! Ok. Thanks! :) ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Pebbleheart.warrior.png-- 06:08, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Will do as I approve. Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Petalnose (W) - For Approval
Well, my first charart. Bad, but who cares!!!! Comments??? <span style="color:Maroon;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Silver;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Maroon;">Alpha  Power to the Pack!  01:54, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

The eye has a purple tint 01:58, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add and darken the shading along her back and add some shadows between her ears on her forehead. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 01:59, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great for a first charart! Darken the shading along her back. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:violet">Gossip Queen!!! 17:16, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading around the whole thing, and possiblr lighten the tail a little. 22:40, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. -- 22:44, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and thicken the shading a lot. Make the ear pink smaller. 23:09, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Fixed everything. Comments? <span style="color:Maroon;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Silver;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Maroon;">Alpha  Power to the Pack!  20:19, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck under the head. See Hazeltail's warrior image for an example. Blur the shading, too. 21:53, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur the shading. Our User Page

Updated: Like this? <span style="color:Maroon;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Silver;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Maroon;">Alpha  Power to the Pack!  14:00, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a bit more. -- 16:49, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. 12:22, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, blur it, and thicken it. 17:07, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Is THIS blurred enough? <span style="color:Maroon;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Silver;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Maroon;">Alpha  Power to the Pack!  19:29, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more. It helps if you smudge it, blur, smudge, blur, etc. Willow  heart  1231  02:21, September 20, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Thicken the shading. 03:22, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think It's thick enougth Rainear   Let the rain guide you  03:37, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the head and midriff. 21:07, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bit smaller. 00:31, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Quite honestly this looks fine by my standards. It has adequate shading, ear pink and no blotchiness or anything that seems to be wrong with it. This is good to go. Setting 24 hours; if comments about how the ear pink needs to be tweaked in some little way, I may scream. 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - D:D:D: I'm ruining another  24 hours but I think the shading could be blurred a little more. Mosswhisker &amp; Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:35, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Stealth, but it really doesn’t need to be, as I stated before. It looks fine. Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Ki) (Alt) - For Approval
Sorry for my slight inactivity, marching band has gotten the better of me. I wasn't sure what the preferred way was to leave a new message without having it at the bottom of the page, so I just made one manually, but if I should do it differently let me know. Well, here's Blossomfall's alternate kit image. I had some troubles uploading it but now the changes are showing, so comments and suggestions? 15:20, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is over the limit. With Birchfall's image up, though it is in the wrong section. 15:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall's image may have been up first but Ice got her's up in the right section first. The point of the sections is to know how many images are up for approval. Images put up in the wrong section shouldn't count. Blur the shading and highlights. 16:13, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, thanks Ashshadow. :P I was confused about that. Define the stripe a tiny bit. 16:25, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, you got to defining the stripe before I could say reuploaded for blurring the shading and highlights. I'll get to the stripe in a bit. 16:32, September 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm having difficulties defining the stripe because of the way there's shading and part of a highlight on it. Suggestions? 17:07, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 19:58, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I do not know, Icethroat. What I would do, is I would just redraw the stripe, and blur it, then add highlights and the shading, and try to make it as equal as i can. :3 20:22, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Whitestorm, I've already blurred the highlights, or do you mean blur he highlights some more after my reuploading. Frostheart, I tried that and it didn't look good at all, and the stripe looked too big. Personally I think the stripe is already defined enough, and when I define it is has to be blurred again and the cycle repeats itself infinitely; does anyone else think I should definie the stripe? 20:46, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing, she looks brown, not pale brown. Also, blur the highlights. Other than that, she looks great! 20:53, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

If you want it to look paler, consider desaturating it. 22:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I meant to blur the highlights some more. 23:16, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say the stripe dosen't need any more blurring or defining, you just might want to sharpen the end of the stripe. But that is just a suggestion. Dappleclaw P-p-p-poker face 03:10, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

I meant the highlight on the stomach. 20:15, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took a few days, I've been busy (as it seems I always am these days). I think this is just the right color for being pale, and I think that I've finally got the highlight blurred just the right amount (it was an awkward shape, I had to fix its shipe by adding more and then darkening all of them). Comments? 21:18, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

No, this is brown, not pale brown (srry if i sound like a nitpicker) 23:50, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

In my opinion the brown is fine the way it is. Dappleclaw Danger! Mousefur bites! 01:47, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look pale, though. Pale brown would be like Fallowfern's image. 03:46, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree; try using the color of the highlights. Our User Page!

It is a little off, I suppose, but it is really good and I don't think you should redo the ENTIRE thing just because of a few comments. I think if you just dodge the entire image with like, the brush on 10%, it will look fine. Just my opinion 01:08, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I edited the image and made it paler to match close to Fallowfern's image by desaturating it (with the hue and saturation bar under adjustment on pixlr) before all of the comments past Flowerleaf's were put up, but my computer is hating me right now and is trying to tell me I can't open the file because it's in use in another program when it's not. Restarting my computer will probably help (hopefully), but if not then I get to edit the image again (whoo...there's a reason I save under a different file name on my computer each time...); however, I'm at a point right now in a few other things on my laptop that I'm not at a good point to restart it, but hopefully I'll get a chance to restart it tomorrow or in a couple of days. So please only comment on something besides the brown color until I can get the new pale-colored version uploaded. Thanks. 03:13, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

You may want to blur the highlights on the tail, and shading by the chest and paws. Dappleclaw God of Ghosts and spirits ... 17:53, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? Blurring the highlights on the tail actually made it worse looking, so I left it without blurring, since it was already blurred some. 16:05, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't think she looks pale brown. 02:59, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I didn't see your explanation above. Scratch that comment, then. 03:00, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've uploaded it now, so comments about colors are okay again (I didn't like to see five different comments on the color when I'd already edited it and my computer was just hating me, it seemed kind of pointless...), do you still think it doesn't look pale? i think it's really pale now... 23:34, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Personally, I think it could be paler, but...

Blur the highlights. 23:37, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's great! The colour looks perfect =) Perhaps blur the earpink a little bit 23:22, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink and blur the highlight on the chest. This is really good :D 00:36, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I still think it just looks brown, not pale brown. . . 21:10, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think the color is fine. You have to remember that shading takes up more space on a kit. 12:38, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Indeed it does, Ashshadow, but she could just make the base colour lighter. 05:57, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened and blurred the ear pink. if I blur the chest highlight any more, it will lose its shape and possibly ruin the entire image. As for the color, I want it to be pale brown, not light brown, and it doesn't have to be the exact same color as another image with the same description because cats in real life aren't exactly the same, so I don't really want to change the color anymore... (Sorry it's taken me this long to get to this, marching band has kept me quite busy.) 20:39, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Light brown and pale brown are pretty much the same colour. Anyways, I know they don't have to be the same as some other cat, but this really just doesn't look pale. I'm sorry if I'm being arguable, but I just really think it needs to be a lot lighter. 21:15, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

The color is perfectly adequate for her. Shading is perfect, and she seems to be quite well done to me. Setting 24 hours; please do not comment about a color change. I am not aiming for being rude at all to you, Mosspool. But certain things do not need changing, because some of that has a lot to do with opinion instead of fact. As we have no factual evidence on Blossomkit’s true color, we cannot assume her color would be lighter, darker or paler than the brown presented here. This color is not a dark brown, nor is it just a regular brown; it is perfectly acceptable as it is. 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Owlstar (A) - For Approval
Eh...Comments? 23:49, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur and brighten the highlights. 01:23, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sometimes, I feel like the world would be better without shading :/ Keep the critique coming, please! 01:37, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. There's too much shading on the back, not enoguh on the chest/legs/muzzle area. And the head shading is very. . . straight. (if that makes sense XD) 03:19, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? 04:05, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlights to the flank, shoulder, and face. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 21:06, September 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * Highlights aren't necessary, but either darken the shading or add highlights. 21:21, September 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the shading. -- 01:46, September 17, 2010 (UTC)




 * Reuploaded - Added Highlights. 04:05, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights a little bigger. Willow heart  1231  01:48, September 17, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Reuploaded - Is this okay? 03:59, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is he supposed to have a splotch on his leg? 14:16, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Whoops. Fixed it. 22:00, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there is some blurred lineart in these spots: The top of the closer front leg, the back of the neck, the bottom and top of the closer haunch, and the chest. Dappleclaw God of Ghosts and spirits ... 22:19, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make it bigger, so it is more noticible. 20:42, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I don't see it. I think it may be your computer. If I get another person telling me it's blurred, I'll fix it. 20:44, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I see the blurred line art. Please fix it =) 21:57, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the line-art. 23:17, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

The line are still looks blurred on the back of the haunch, where the line is flat, and on the back of the neck, beneath the ear. Dappleclaw God of Ghosts and spirits ... 23:48, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also darken the earpink 07:09, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I think you missed my previous message, darken the ear-pink and make it bigger. 12:05, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I do not think that the ear-pink needs to be bigger, but make it more pink. 17:04, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? 20:16, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Umm... I think you made it gray-ish. It needs to be darker and a lot more pink. 02:11, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I. Hate. Ear. Pinks. For. Grey. Cats. 14:24, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

If you don't like earpink on a gray cat try a ginger one. I think the problem is the color you're using. It's purpleish. Try a more red shade. 20:52, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to keep bothering you, but I still can't see it very well. 21:19, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - As stated above, I. Hate. Ear. Pinks. For. Grey. Cats. 22:45, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

It looks sort of purple, try to make it bright-pink. 02:51, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't make it a bright pink, maybe a coral color. Darken the shading. 14:40, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - StarClan, help me. 23:24, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and blur the highlights. 23:31, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - How's the ear pink? 01:30, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks better, just make it bigger. 03:20, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the ear pink. I'm very happy with the charat now. >.< 20:59, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

There is blurred line-art on his haunch and ear. 23:55, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the haunch. 00:39, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - This is the first time I'm actually happy with A charart. 04:44, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely :3 Darken the ear pink though. 05:14, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. -- 22:01, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the chest shading. This was the best I could do >.< 02:01, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

There is blurred line-art still on his haunch, ear, back, and leg. 15:31, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed it. 18:07, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC) Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (A) - For Approval
It's very blah to me. What do you guys think? 01:22, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular. 01:27, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Centre the haunch highlight, and blur the highlights. 03:21, September 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree with blurring the highlights, but the haunch highlight is fine where it is. 21:00, September 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, blur the highlights and maybe darken and largen the ear pink? -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 16:16, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 21:13, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks great! CBA? 18:18, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear pink could use just a tad more blurring, but that's just me. 01:47, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ehh, yeah, the ear pink looks a bit odd. Perfect image, other than that ^_^ 07:29, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ear pink could be bigger as well. 12:02, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I can't change the ear pink without blurring the lineart, trust me, I tried. 12:43, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then, nevermind. :) 02:09, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 14:39, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? 21:41, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Great job! 23:29, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the earpink into more of a triangular position would make it look more natural. 00:41, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I honestly think this looks fine… ear pink is pretty good as it is, while shading is perfect. I don’t think it could be blurred more. Setting 24 hours. 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar Rogue (alt)- For Approval
Constructments? I took the tail lineart from his rogue image, if that's okay. If not, I can change it. 21:36, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his legs. 23:59, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

There is color outside the lineart around his chest and legs. 02:16, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ Done. Did I blur the leg shading enough? 06:41, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the lineart. Lighten the whole thing. 17:38, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine. 17:41, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

darken the earpink 00:26, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ Darkened ear pink. 21:57, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights. This is really quite lovely :3 00:48, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten your highlights. 03:21, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ehh. . . I'm confused. Should I make them brighter or lighter? XP 04:48, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

LOL, do both and then blur them :P 05:27, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, how can I make them brighter and lighter? I'm going to make them brighter since I can't really see them :/ 21:06, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't brighter and lighter the same thing? o_O I'm not really sure...anyways, darken the shading a tad. 15:29, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

★Re-Uploaded★ I get why some people hate shading black cats now >_< Anyways, I think he looks better now. 17:19, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Very much so. Very lovely. Comments before approval? 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Alt. D)~For Approval
Ta da! fourth charart. A mottled cat was hard to do. 22:32, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

When was Leopardstar a brown mottled cat? I checked her page and didn't see it, though, I'm really bad at looking. XD 22:35, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, Frostheart, it's in the trivia. The alternate stuff's always in the trivia. Echo Leaf-fall.. 22:40, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, i just added that now. I meant to do it sooner, but i forgot, but it's legit :) 22:41, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Great job. Make the mottles...more visible. Blur and darken the ear pink and darken the head and muzzle shading. 00:25, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- but the uploaders not working, so will try again another time 00:38, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't darken the ear-pink too much though. S t  o  r  m  1  7 Birthday Time!  00:49, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Where's the light coming from? If it's coming from the top, add shading to the front of the haunch, and if it's coming from the front, lighten up the chest. Dapple claw  02:05, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Changed the ear pink a bit, and lightened the chest shading. What next? 00:22, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is really well done :) Make the ear pink bigger, and perhaps define the mottles on the chest a bit. -- 00:53, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:57, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the mottles a bit more round and bigger. 02:23, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

I personally like how the mottles look, and if i make them any bigger they all melt together and it looks like a badly shaded cat. I'd prefer to leave them the way they are. 02:35, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the mid-riff shading. 00:51, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I would still make the ear-pink darker. 02:56, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly, and lighten the rest. 03:18, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Did what was asked. I'm going to be gone all weekend camping, so don't decline please and thank you. I'll do all the comments when i get home. 22:47, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm.. move the ear-pink closer to the ear, it is kind of outside of it now. 02:28, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I'm back! 19:12, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back. =) Comments before approval? 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D) - For Approval
I like this one! Comments? Cobalt paw  ღ  20:06, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, and she needs a pupil. 20:15, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

She does have a pupil. Cobalt paw  ღ  20:42, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger, and possibly darken the paws and ear furthest from us. -- 21:41, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading Dapple  claw  21:48, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make it more gingery. 22:00, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Cobalt paw  ღ  22:13, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is blurred lineart on her legs and tail. 22:16, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Cobalt paw  ღ  22:32, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the pupil more visible and add shadding to the midriff. 22:31, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the back and stomach. Also, make the ear-pink smaller and a tad lighter. 22:34, September 23, 2010 (UTC)T

The eye looks weird. I think you should make it like Leafpool's. 01:41, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? I'm not going to change the eye, because its how I like it. Cobalt paw  ღ  01:52, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, because it's like Heathertail's. Theres still some blurred lineart on the back of the haunch. Dapple claw  02:05, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I really think you should make the pupil more noticable, it looks strange. Also, still make the ear-pink smaller and lighter. 02:23, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice! Make the ear-pink a bit brighter, and bigger. Blur the shading on the chest. ScarletwindThe Uchiha's final Hope 02:38, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I know cats like Heathertail and Brindleface have that pupil, but it really does just look odd on her. I can hardly tell she has an eye. . . 02:41, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

- The red indicates the blurred line-art and the blue that you should change the eye. I agree with Mosspool. Even though it looks like Heathertail's and Brindleface's, It doesn't match with most of our chararts. Also, Lighten the earpink. -- 05:09, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't matter if the eye matches the majority or not. It's an acceptable style and doesn't have to be changed. 19:58, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

But, if the majority of the project disagrees with the style, it need to be changed. 13:39, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Cobalt paw  ღ  15:44, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. 15:27, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. What’s wrong with it? It’s not out of the ear nor so small as to be unnoticeable. Setting 24 hours; no comments about Mr. Ear Pink, please. 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think if you add a tiny bit of black to the eye, it might look a bit more normal. Like this:



20:13, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

The eye design doesn't matter, it's not a rule nor is it set in stone. Elorisa can do whatever style eye she chooses, it looks fine to me. Please don't comment on the eye anymore. 20:11, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Continuing CBA. 20:35, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (Alt. R) ~ For Approval
With an image being withdrawn and one being declined, this should be exactly 35 if I counted right (and i count things twice....sometimes) This is also officially my 2 and a half charart since Frostheart♥ has taken over my Rockshade charart. (wow, after I said I would never do a black cat again, look at my work!) So...Comments?

Darken the gray and make the mud more brown. xD Also make the ear-pink pinker. Thicken the shading. 01:21, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Nice! Make the earpink pinker, it looks white right now. 01:23, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make his tail shorter. Darken the ear pink. 02:19, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ear-pink needs to be darker and smaller. Also, maybe the mud be lighter? I can't really see it. 02:38, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

And blurred. Blur the shading, add it on the tail and back. 11:20, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Definitely shorten the tail. It does look quite stumpy! XD 11:22, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

GEEZ slow down, I'm only one person. I'll get this taken care of ASAP Earth  bender Tawny Style! 22:28, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: Comments? Earth bender Tawny Style! 22:48, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh, very nice =) Lighten the streaks a little bit more, and maybe add one more on the chest. 22:58, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could add mud to the legs? Just a suggestion. Dapple claw  23:35, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the mud streaks and the highlights. In Europe black cats are lucky Tawny ;P 00:53, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add mud to the legs. 03:17, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

And Tail! 06:11, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... maybe make less mud streaks but make them bigger? Either way, they still need to be lightened. 02:26, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Once again...I will get to this ASAP. I'm busy with school...but since its weekend, i can do all HW on sunday. Tawny not logged in.

RE-UPLOADED: Comments? Earth bender Tawny Style! 12:24, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I really think that now it looks more like an olive-and-black cat rather than a cat with mud stripes on it! You might want to define the stripes a bit more and make them more brown. Otherwise I think it's perfect! 13:04, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the stripes look yellowish. 13:41, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes more brown and skinny, add one or two mud streaks on his back legs. 16:35, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I actually love the mud streak style. Ever got mud smeared on you before? It doesn’t come on a nice and straight line. And mud is not one definite brown color; nothing in nature ever is. This is a perfectly acceptable mud. Setting 24 hours. 02:40, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. 14:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)