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Acorn Fur (ES) ~ CBA
Colors from the kit. 20:50, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading 01:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Is that too light? 02:02, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on all the legs a bit? 19:27, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:24, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the facial shading? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:54, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups How's that? 13:26, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on her left front leg and curve the neck shading to go with the neck more. 10:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups completly redid shading, as I wasn't liking it. 13:07, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading near the tail/booty & the shoulder? 19:07, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  04:06, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 13:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

the shading on the neck and legs still needs defining. 17:33, October 25, 2015 (UTC)\

Re-ups  20:39, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the textuer a little more. Belllastar (talk) 01:03, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Its fine 11:38, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think it should be more defined too. This is super lovely though! I love Acorn Fur! <3

Re-ups Thanks! How's that? 18:44, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source more, the position of your shading doesn't make sense in some places. 18:12, October 27, 2015 (UTC) (Oops..)

Re-ups You forgot your signature. Light is coming from --> 17:53, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 03:42, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (ES) ~ For Approval
23:54, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups just realized I forgot to smudge a few markings 23:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the markings some more please 00:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a tad? oh dang I want this but this is so beautiful 01:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reups Thanks Fox 09:58, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There should be thinner and a greater amount of stripes. I also think her patches are paler than this. 10:11, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

theyre not paler, theyre duller. 11:43, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

'reups I use highlights, that;'s why the color's brighter. I dulled them down a bit though. 15:35, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Can you shrink the amount of white from her belly. It doesnt go that far down on her other images 02:53, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:23, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the white paws? 13:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Indeed I can 17:50, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

This is hot. Blur the haunch shading a lil bit? 19:04, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I really should label my layers, I keep smudging the black instead of the shading >_> 20:45, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the facial shading just a little? 08:55, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reups 22:58, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you dull the paches a little more Belllastar (talk) 01:00, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'd rather not, unless I absolutely have to. The only way to do that is turn off the highlights completely, which is the only thing making it look brighter. 08:57, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Well, do you need the highlights? It is kind of throwing the color off, but if the image doesn't look like what you wanted it to look without the highlights, then I don't suggest you to remove them. 09:23, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't need them, no, but I've used them on literally every other image I've made (not counting tweaks) and haven't had to turn them off, even though some of them are much brighter than this. Plus, at least on my screen, |the color looks almost exactly the same as the ancient tribe image, which is the on I picked the color from. Plus, turning them off makes a pretty minimal difference :/

Sorry for being stubborn. 18:07, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can barely see a difference at all, honestly. I think the colors are fine as they are. o.o

If anything, you should match the MC in terms of color, not the ancient, as I'm pretty sure the MC was first. 04:18, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

But it does match? If anything, it might be the shading or highlighted areas that make it look like it doesn't match.

Get rid of the white 20:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Also waste between the front legs 18:24, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (ES) ~ CBA
Colours from the ancient. Now, I used a little highlights, just along the back and tail and a little around the left ear and face. I can remove it if she doesn't look black-furred, but I prefer to keep it. 22:22, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading somemore Gorgeouuss 22:28, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder/chest shading a tad. Lovely! 22:48 Thu Oct 22

Reupload Thanks! :) 23:11, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

The pupil size doesnt quite match in ==> that eye and its kinda bothering me. Thicken it by one pixel on > that side of it? 23:34, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Completely forgot to mention the design of the eye is based of Dapplepelt's image so credits to Shinxy for that. 00:10, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

theres lika a brighter streak on her back and tail. 09:48, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

realised its supposed to be highlights but they should be expanded so it doesnt look like a random streak. 10:53, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Her nose should be black; I think you forgot to fill it in. She looks really cute! 14:48, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! The nose is filled in and is the exact same colour as the ancient. It's a sort of black-pink colour. 21:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a tad more? 13:33, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:19, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Color pick from the StarClan, please. The ancient image isn't the first in the set; when I tweaked these images, I think I posted the StarClan first, and the ancient image was posted afterwards... She looks a bit lighter than she should be, which I presume is because of the highlights. Also, smooth out the chest and <-- front leg shading.

Reupload 20:47, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Tall Shadow is third best cat, and you did justice to her. :D 03:42, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Raven Pelt (ES) - CBA
Sorry if his fur is a bit too light, I tried doing it darker and it just didn't look good to me. He has the same name as me I have an excuse. 21:59, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe use differnt highlights/tint then to make it look not so green? And perhaps darken it after that? --Dewsplash (talk) 22:01, October 23, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 22:01, October, 23, 2015

Well, it needs to match the rogue, so you'll need to darken it...

'''Reuploaded, I can't go much darker then this. 00:47, October 24, 2015 (UTC)'''

its still green. 09:41, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

and his nose should be black. 11:03, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Where did his whiskers go??

I can see the whiskers just fine...? But can you smooth out the main body shading? 20:57, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

no the whiskers seemed to have disappeared on the sides of his face 21:21 Mon Oct 26

'''Reuploaded, I have no idea how the whiskers vanished. 00:33, October 27, 2015 (UTC)'''

He looks still kinda green. Are you using highlights? 03:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

A cat's fur isn't completely black, it has a very small amount of saturation to it, and in this case I chose green to match the eyes. I will see if I can get the highlights to be less saturated to better match the rouge, I do agree that he is a bit too green. 17:10, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Green is probably...not the best color to try. Green is a huge no-no in this project and it's kinda shot on sight... How about a blue? That might work. ^^

Reuploaded Your right, blue does work better in this case. I usually use green when I need to saturate my blacks, but I see why it isn't as appealing to others. 18:02, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 03:41, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Jagged Peak (Alt ES) ~ For Approval
wow he's adorable. Belllastar (talk) 13:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Did you forget the earpink? lol. Thicken the shading on the main body; nice job! 14:11 Sat Oct 24

Define the light on the legs and tail. 14:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ya I did and I struggled with tail shading, but i will try again --Belllastar (talk) 14:19, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define overall shading. 14:46, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups what do you think of the crippled foot, and can somebody fix the link to his page Belllastar (talk) 15:32, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front legs/chest a little bit more. 18:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define facial shading a bit? He gets these great images and he's so annoying, heh --Dewsplash (talk) 01:07, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:07, October, 25, 2015

I think the stripes taper a bit more on his other images. they also seem to be more hard edged and they seem to be darker. 09:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I disagree aboat the stripes but i'm fixing the shading right now Belllastar (talk) 13:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Fff I was looking at the wrong image. Lease define the shading depth. 14:27, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

And could you define the light on the front legs, maybe? 23:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes just a tiny bit. Also define the light on the chest and face, if that's not already been said (I'm kinda tired and can't focus). Also, define the ear pink- it's pretty much all in shadow, I think, and I can't see it at all.

No date on this. Declining. 20:58, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please don't decline this I worked so hard, I reserved this on october 21st 2015, I am sorry I thought that was for tweaking only and this I my second charart, please cut me some slack, if you decline this I am going to cry! --Belllastar (talk) 22:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Bell it has to be declined because you didnt put your reserve date down, and that's part of the rules. 22:50, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

can I re-claim it then and add the date again (I realy was proud of this guy and wanted to see it be approved) --Belllastar (talk) 00:09, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Since its declined you have to wait 2 weeks to reclaim it, so someone could have a chance to try it. --Dewsplash (talk) 00:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 00:15, October, 29, 2015

then can I tweek the art and do his non crippled image, or do I have to-redo it --Belllastar (talk) 00:29, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Only warriors and above are allowed to tweak images 00:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I know I meen can I use the same art, just redo his foot for the non-cripled versoin --Belllastar (talk) 00:40, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to wait 2 weeks to reclaim, that's only on images declined for the one month limit, and yours wasn't. I'm not sure how long the waiting period is, though. 00:56, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

It's nonsense that you have to wait for two weeks. That's only if its declined due to the one month limit. You can re-reserve this right away. 00:58, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Yay!! --Belllastar (talk) 01:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups thanks to Burntclaw and Icebreeze (luv your user names) --Belllastar (talk) 01:24, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudspots (ES) ~ For Approval


diffine shadeing and in the other images the chest marking is shaped more like a triangle. Belllastar (talk) 16:47, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~

Awww, so cute! Love Cloudspots. Can you define the shading on the left arm? 03:47, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to define your highlights a tiny bit more. Very cute! 17:20, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

diffine shading Belllastar (talk) 01:26, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Redthistle (Star) - For Approval
So pretty, so much fun to do :o I feel like I butchered the design... 20:20, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her a little bit? She's gorgeous --Dewsplash (talk) 20:57, October 24, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 20:57, October, 24, 2015

Nice. :) Do you want the file for the med cat? I can send it if you like. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 21:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 22:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Thanks (: I removed a very low opacity highlight layer I had and turned the 3rd shading layer on the tail back on. And yes the file would be very appreciated! My email is danielle.j.palmer95@gmail.com (not my main one so I don't really care if its seen) 01:01, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lets see... The way you smudged the main pelt makes it look like her body is a flat sheet of paper covered in fur. Could you possibly curve the way you smudged it a bit, and make it flow with he body more? I'm sorry if that sounded rude. 03:26, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Ugh. So I lost the original file I had for it so I had to redo it. Color picked from med cat, and attempted to match it better after looking at it without shading. I will probably redo the main body markings within the next couple days >.< 20:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the main body? This is so gorgeous *.* ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:28, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

reupped ^^ And this is how far the shading really goes. I darkened it so it would be a little more obvious but the way I do shading can sometimes make it look a bit odd or seem receded ^.^ 00:44, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading? Gorgeous job! Sagestream (talk) 23:12, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Birch (ES) - CBA
Ok, so, I had to use another computer to upload this, mine's acting weird. It looked like it matched better on my computer... so idk. 00:02, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Would you like the file? Also, his eyes are hazel [yellow-green], rather than green. 00:14, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changed the eye color, also fiddled with the stripes and shading. Thanks for the offer, but I'd like to do this without the file, if possible. 00:46, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still seeing green eyes... Can you also define main body/belly shading? Lovely =3

Re-uploaded 15:06, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

This is gorgeous. CBA?

Sorry but i think the chest shading could be smoothed a bit more. 01:56, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

and expanded 05:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Waste between the front legs 18:20, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:16, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 03:39, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Daisytoe (Star)- For Approval
How do you not thumb the images, idk ;-; Anyway, here is my Daisytoe starclan thingy ;u; Idk how to not thumb the images im so sorry DX

Sagestream (talk) 02:50, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

-- Reups - Forgot grey paws oops Sagestream (talk) 02:56, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yo, this is pretty good! Maybe blur/smudge the shading a bit? Also, to not thumb the images, sue source mode and simply get rid of the "thumb". 03:20, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Thanks, Burnt c: Sagestream (talk) 03:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. --Dewsplash (talk) 03:37, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 03:37, October, 25, 2015

Reups Sagestream (talk) 03:41, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading and add eye depth. 03:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 04:00, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste (I think) bordering outside of the charart. Blur and define the shading some more.

Reups u.u Sagestream (talk) 04:23, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

You're uploading a different image every time. Please upload under File:Daisytoe.star.png to prevent the unnecessary deletion of images. 09:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. 12:14, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

The ears on the mickey mouse heads should be more rounded. Also, the base for the white is pure white, if that helps. (If you want the file, just ask.) 13:17, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Apologies, Burnt. it just kept popping up with the 'you have a file with this name already here' and i finally found the overwrite button... ^^' Sagestream (talk) 17:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading, please? 23:13, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 02:11, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

There's a strange darker blob on >>> that leg. Could you somehow fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:10, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

This image needs to be named Daisytoe.star.png so it works with the charart template on her page. Also, as a reminder, the next time you reserve an image, you also need to add a date. I've fixed it for you this time, but the next time, your image will be declined.

I think the shading is leaking from the lineart along the belly 17:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sagestream (talk) 02:03, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please name the file Daisytoe.star.png Like Skye told you. And the ears from the micky mouse pattern still need to be a little more rounder. Thre is also waste on her shoulder. 02:07, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups For me, it says it's name is Daisytoe.star.png.... Sagestream (talk) 02:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

-- OHH okay i found out the problem, i capitalized the 'Star' Sagestream (talk) 02:20, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The waste is still there. 02:44, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's gone?? Sagestream (talk) 03:23, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see waste... And since you know what you're doing, I'm promoting you into an apprentice. 03:25, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ok what you're already an apprentice ^^; next time put the title as For Approval 03:26, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I was a kit when I first made this image so that's why it was "For Evaluation" :p Sagestream (talk) 04:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

White's looking gray. Nice job! 05:18, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

My main pelt layer is actually pure white; maybe it's the shading? Sagestream (talk) 05:37, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the stomach we=here the tail and the elbow meets. 12:42, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see where the shading leak is..... Sagestream (talk) 23:12, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's mainly on the spot where the tail and the main body intersect, and it's leaking away from the belly too. I hope that helped! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:38, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Gorsestar (ES) - CBA
until 70/right where we are 12:19, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

The base itself looks to be a fair bit lighter than what you have, and I think the stripes could have a bit of lighter fur between them... they look a bit too spaced together compared to something like the rogue image. Yes, I know, it's not the same side, but I'm not entirely sure the stripes should be so close together and the base that dark where I can't even see the stripes themselves on the flank.

Re-uploaded The base is actually nearly white! If this looks too dark, it's probably the shading. The shading has 3 layers (a tint, the main shading base, and a highlight area.) I defined the spacing between the stripes instead. I matched the deputy on this one, which doesn't seem to space out that much. 13:39, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's the texture or stripe-smudge, but I'm not sure.

Define shading? Sagestream (talk) 01:50, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:54, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:02, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom, only leads can CBA things, not apprentices. And please define the ear pink 11:02, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, Fox ;__; I didn't know about that. I promise it won't happen again. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:10, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine, just please don't do it again. @burnt: please define the facial shading 12:24, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:12, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 07:46, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrow Fur (ES) ~ For Approval
I'm still not sure if "same markings" mean same coloring, so I'm gonna leave this lovely brown for now. If any of you objects then I'll redo this

She's beautiful! Define shading a little? 14:58, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 

she shouldnt have white, only on her belly and paws. and i think the markings should be the same colour. 17:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Personally I don't think the marking need to be the same color but that's just what I think. --Dewsplash (talk) 17:59, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 17:59, October, 25, 2015

Sparrow Fur has the same tortoiseshell markings as Turtle Tail. At the very least, the pattern itself should be similar to Turtle Tail's. The color can be up for interpretation, I suppose.

So does this looks like Turtle Tail's enough? (I'm so lazy I literally just added one layer of marshmallow on top of the chocolate) I should probably redo the pattern later =P

It's decided that she should match colours as well as pattern as Turtle Tail. Can you match the new Turtle Tail? 06:18, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Um, I never once said that. I said the pattern itself should match. We don't know if the colors are the same or not; the pattern should be the only thing that matches- the colors are fine.

There is a random very bright white patch on her back. Could you fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:08, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Yea it was bothering me earlier too. And for those of you who think the chest shading looks strange and are too lazy to comment, I fixed that too =P

The white's looking kind of brownish. Great job. 05:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (ES) ~ For Approval
I'm really not happy with this but eh 19:57, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading; I can barely see it. 20:06, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading near wear the chest meets his front left leg. 18:58, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. 15:53, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Juniper Branch ~ For Approval
C'est horrible 15:46, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the shading? Sagestream (talk) 22:21, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think brightening shading on a cat like this is actually going to be possible or do it justice. It's dark navy-black shading, and the cat has a near-black base. If you meant 'lighten', I also don't think that'll do much for it because I'll be told to define it again what with the dark base. 00:22, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Please do lighten the shading. I cannot see the pattern underneath it. 14:34, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink more? (if needed?) I love this so much <3 wish I can shade black cats properly D;

Reups I only lightened it five percent, because otherwise I couldn't see it. Also, at the start I used a lighter black to see the lineart better - I forgot to put the real colour back at the end, so I've done that. Also, changes are here 16:40, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Alder (ES) ~ For Approval
Snowfall-girl ^^ 18:13, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

The entire pelt is supposed to be flecked in white, and there shouldn't be any large patches of gray.

Re-ups 23:33, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the shading everywhere. 08:29, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 12:23, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink more? (if needed?) I love this so much <3 wish I can shade black cats properly D;

Spotted Fur (ES) ~ For Approval
These new blanks are super rad 8D 03:27, 27, 10, 2015

Beautiful image! Could you make the facial shadow sharper, just a little? I love this! <3 ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:34, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you :> 16:10, 27, 10, 2015

The dapples seem to be a slightly different color than on the other images. Maybe it's just my screen, or the shading/highlights or something. Anyway, this is a beautiful image! 20:58, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could define the ear pink just a little? It's a little hard to see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:36, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh the ear pink matches his other images ouo 12:23, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Flashnose (Star) ~ For Approval
I'm so happy Doestar was approved! I decided to do Flashnose this time, to challenge myself with a tabby pattern. I don't think I done the stripes any good, and any .xcf files would be very appreciated! Comment away. ^.^ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:41, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm.... I have the file for the queen, I just need to find it. Would you like it? 03:56, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Never mind, I lost the file, sorry. As for the image, try and add more stripes. Nice. 05:41, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much! I'm sorry you lost the file, but I think I can cope without it for now. I added more stripes to the flank and head. Hopefully now this looks better than the previous version. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:28, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be more smudged, but that's just me. Very pletty by the way!

Define the shading on the face. Very Nice~ 22:38, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main part of her body. so gorgeous :o 23:50, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you guys so much <3 I expanded the shading on the main body and face, so hopefully you can all see it better. I also smudged the stripes a little more. :) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:22, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Would you like the file for the warrior? There's several markings hidden by the shading that you're lacking right now, and I'm sure it'll help with colors and stuff too! 01:35, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The white seems to go up a little bit higher on the other images. Nice job! 05:11, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks a ton! @Rainlegs: I think I'm ok actually, I'll just observe the marking a little more and fix them up in the next upload. For this upload, I expanded the white on the muzzle. I think the queen is the side I have to match? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:11, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tall stripes appear to be over smudged- please sharpen them 12:22, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

That's okay! The only major thing is that her spine has three stripes instead of just the one all the way down it (or at least two on the warrior, in theory there should be three for symmetry). There's brighter orange patches mixed in the stripes too here or there, and the white on the muzzle doesn't go as far out on the face as you currently have it stretched; it should stick just to the muzzle. 02:11, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lightningtail (ES) - For Approval
Don't tell me to lighten him- he's a black cat, and it's actually said in Path of Stars that he blends in with the shadows around him, so I'd rather not make him any lighter.

Define Shading? Sagestream (talk) 05:03, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on the face doesn't seem to flow with the fur. Lovely job, as always, Jayce. 05:08, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I have nothing to say but a job well done, Jayce Jaysnow (talk) 05:10, October 28, 2015 (UTC)JaysnowJaysnow (talk) 05:10, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Owl Eyes ES- For Approval
Hello yes it's been a while since I've done any original art for the site, so I started easy with a solid! I've learned a few new things from Sai, I don't use GIMP anymore. Thoughts or critiques? (I also need a new signature holy hell)  07:28, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't texture on the kit, I believe. I think the light on the legs could be expanded too. Great job on this! (Those big eyes *.*) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:34, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't believe that's texture; I think that's how his shading and highlights are, Blossom.

Well I did give him a teeny tiny bit of texture, I thought he looked a tad bit flat without it and I thought it was artist's choice but I can remove it! 07:40, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Images have to match though, I think you should remove it, also, he's looking green... 07:51, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge or blur the ear pink more? It just looks a tad hard edged ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:13, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Bee (ES) ~ For Approval
60000 bees 19:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

i realised i forgot a shading layer on her ankle, dont comment on it. 19:21, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading on the face a tad bit darker so i can make it out a bit better? 19:31, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

oooh so shiney! the yellows a bit paler on the rogue Belllastar (talk) 01:41, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded its not, its just more of the pale underside and shading, but this is a different side. 05:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

River Ripple (Cotp) - For Approval
Don't comment on shading, I'm gonna define that. Also River Ripple is second best cat. 20:59, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are darker than on his other images. Agreed. He is awesome 23:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a little too blurry - but, you don't need to change it. Beautiful job. Sagestream (talk) 23:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I can redo the stripes if you want, I'm not super happy with them either. 03:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

blur the stripes a tad more. 03:48, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (Lo) ~ For Approval
23:22, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Sun Shadow (ES) - For Approval
black cats for halloween 00:56 Thu Oct 29

Casually renames. It should be File:Sun Shadow.es.png. Capitalization is everything.