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Swoop (CG) ~ CBA
I haven't done a charart in like - 5 years please be gentle. 00:41, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

What are you talking about? This is amazing!! Regardless, I think the ginger is too neon compared to the queen. 01:29, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded aah thank you! I tried my best to dull the colour. 03:05, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the body. Nice work Echo!Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you!! Hopefully this looks a bit better. 21:14, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There's pinkish tint near her right cheek.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:55, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

The top of the shoulder shading and the outside of the haunch seem to be a little over-defined, sorry I know that's annoying. xD  H A W K  F I R E  23:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad on the front leg closest to us 00:44, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Potato, can you redline where the pink is? I can't catch onto it well since I shaded with red. 01:57, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Um.. I use a tablet, not a computer, can someone else show Echo what I mean?Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:05, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's just shading tint, nothing that looks different Malina457 (talk) 14:36, November 4, 2018 (UTC)malina

Yeah, I agree. There's no pink tint on the cheek from what I can see.  H A W K  F I R E  15:26, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to be broken record, but the orange still doesn't quite match. The queen is more saturated than what you have here. Maybe this will help? And there need to be some stripes over her chest. 15:44, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I just saw Shinx (the OA of the queen/kit-mother image) on Discord a few days ago. I could try and ask her if she has the file for the queen if you'd like. Maybe that would help in this situation? ​​​​

Yes please ;; Colour picking has been difficult and I can't seem to find a medium between being too rustic or too neon. 22:31, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, hopefully this helps. I colourpicked from the original cave guard image so that might've made it look different, but I picked from the queen and changed the colours so hopefully this is better! 23:05, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? Nice job! 05:30, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Jag (CG) ~ For Approval
Gosh, the mud was a challenge! I'm still not sure if i even did that well on it, but I tried. Ah well, I like challenges! I'm just gonna get this up before I ruin it more by fiddling. ^^; SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a bit. 03:33, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Can you fix the pupils a bit? They might just look weird on my screen but they look a bit off with them being pointed to the ground. This is super cute btw and you did great on the mud! 03:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eyes. And tysm, Echo. ^^ SquidwardPlays 03:54, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Is there a red or pink tint on the shading or something? It kind of sticks out, and I'm not sure if it goes well with the rest of Jag. Also, light source? Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There is the tint as Shadow said.. can you make the mud on the tail brighter? I can barely see it. Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:47, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Messed around with the mud on the tail a bit, is it any better? I also completely redid the shading. SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I can't see shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:01, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? SquidwardPlays 11:07, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Yes! This looks wonderful. The only thing I really see is the haunch shading looks kind of clumped in one spot, can you expand it to the belly and the bottom of the haunch more?  H A W K  F I R E  15:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I THINK I fixed the haunch shading. SquidwardPlays 11:19, November 4, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

add some more shading depth and darkness? it seems a lil flat. 00:27, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Night (CG) - For Evaluation
This is probably an unpopular opinion but I enjoyed doing the mud. Also, yes, I'll fix the shading. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:19, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and smudge the mud a little bit. It looks kind of clump in some areas, like the front leg and the flank.  H A W K  F I R E  13:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups nvm I don't like mud now Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:02, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. And the mud needs to be smudged a tad more. And is it me, or does her eyes make her look like an ailen from space? You don't have to change the eyes by the way.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:06, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups that's meant to be eyelids, because eyes and earpink are my weak spots. Also the shading is now officially as dark as it can get. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 01:05, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink is now super dark on the right side and bright on the left side. Can you make them the same color?  H A W K  F I R E  03:42, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I think that's because the shading is covering the ear pink, Hawkey ^^ Regardless, could you add some more shading to the haunch and tail? I can see where you defined the shading on the face, chest, legs and stomach, but I can't see any shading on the haunch or tail. 15:37, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

My bad! Disregard my previous comment. ^^  H A W K  F I R E  19:00, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the lighter areas? I'm not seeing any here at all. ​

Could you define the mud or maybe sharpen it? I'm having trouble seeing it. 02:42, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups oof Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:58, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 21:51, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 22:09, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the paws, tail and chest.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:18, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Alright, this may just be me, but I personally feel like the mud is now a little too intense, if that makes sense. I feel like it might've been sharpened up too much, and maybe could do with having less of the mud in general, but that's just what I think. If you think the mud's fine, you don't have to do a thing, since the thing about how bright/intense it is, could also just totally be my screen unless someone else sees it that way too. I just was thinking it so I thought I'd point it out. SquidwardPlays 02:37, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

^ I agree. I think it's a bit excessive on the head as well. The body mud is fine, but it's really bright and contrasts pretty bad on both my screens. Maybe making it a darker and less saturated will help. 23:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the earpink.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:18, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Talon (CG) - For Approval
Wow, love the new blanks! There's some things I need to correct (like the overly dark stomach/haunch shading) but I just wanted to get it up for now.  H A W K  F I R E  23:21, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the lightsource as well? Malina457 (talk) 00:23, November 4, 2018 (UTC)malina

Could you taper the stripe some? 00:41, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I do agree with Malina and Vec, can you lower the opacity of the shading when you fix the light source?Heyoitpotater (talk) 01:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also I added more mud :3  H A W K  F I R E  03:26, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 00:17, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but could you define the lighter areas on the image? I'm mainly only seeing shading throughout the main part of the body and it sort of throws off the pattern. Since I'm also having issues seeing the stripes, I think perhaps tweaking the areas without shading and expanding them might solve this. ​​​

I can darken the stripes to make them more visible, but the dark shading on the <-- side of the body was intentional. I wanted to try a new shading style where it seems like most of the cat's body is hidden in shadows. His other images are very dark as well.  H A W K  F I R E  00:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I realize that, but I can see the pattern on those images. I can't with this one and the shadows obscure it a lot more than they would on other images. ​​

I personally think its fine. I can see everything well on my screen. 01:05, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the pattern perfectly fine. Make sure all colors are the same though. 01:10, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but others (including myself) have gotten the exact same kinds of comments and have been made to change things, so I believe it should also apply here. It's not right to allow one thing to pass, while forcing almost everyone else to change their image. The shading does obscure the pattern here and I can't see it at all. ​​

'''Reuploaded. '''Hopefully you think this looks better.  H A W K  F I R E  01:31, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I asked you to define the light- did you? I'm not seeing that in the file history. ​

I did, but I didn't change a lot because I really like how it is right now. I can see the pattern just fine on both my computer and my phone.  H A W K  F I R E  22:07, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Where did you define it, then? Because I am not seeing any changes to the light in the file history, and it's not fair to anyone else in the past who has gotten made to change their images for this exact same reason. I'm also seeing a lot of miscolored pixels where said shading is.

The miscolored pixels are my version of the mud, like it's mud splatters. David and several others have the same kind of splattered mud style.  H A W K  F I R E  22:22, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

If anyone else genuinely has a problem with my shading, which is supposed to be artist's choice and matches the other images very well, please comment.  H A W K  F I R E  22:24, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

It looks too dark imo, and I cant quite see the light? Malina457 (talk) 16:58, November 8, 2018 (UTC)malina

Stormfur (CG) - For Approval
all colors are the same, this one just lacks the excessive amount of shading his other images have, so it looks lighter. ​​​​​​​

Maybe define the face shading? I love this Malina457 (talk) 02:41, November 5, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Do you have a specific spot you'd like for me to define the shading? ​​​​​​

Adding to Malina's critique by asking you to define shading everywhere because I cannot see it.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:03, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Alright, maybe this'll work? Definitely not used to these blanks yet, but I really do like them... ​​​​​

might be nitpicky but I think there wouldn't be light on the chest with this source. or at least the there'd be shading where the chest fur lineart is if u get what I mean 21:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I still can't see shading except on the ears and tail, can you possibly add more mud.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:13, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I honestly think the amount of mud is good. I can see the shading fine too. Maybe it's your screen??

00:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Spirekit (k) ~ For Approval
that's nice.

00:03, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

can you darken the black a bit? It looks more of a gray to me? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 00:44, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 01:22, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. actually way happier with this. Redid the pattern so it looks like my crazy cat. I need to stop being a troll.

04:23, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Hopkit (SC) (Ki) ~ CBA
00:03, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

could you define shading just a tad, this is lovely. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 00:44, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded 00:20, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 15:12, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (Star) - For Approval
The shading is hideous cause I need to fix something with my tablet, but I finally get to use this. 01:04 Tue Nov 6

This looks gorgeous! Could you soften the speckles only a tad? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:05, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:08 Tue Nov 6

Nice. I think you already plan on fixing the shading, but smooth out and lighten the shading?

I agree with Fox. The shading does need to be lighter since she's a light-colored cat, especially on her face.  H A W K  F I R E  18:17, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded My tablet was hardcore acting up >> 21:51 Tue Nov 6

can you soften the speckles on her back a little? 00:26, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:53 Wed Nov 7

The shading on the tail needs to be defined a bit, as well as the light source for the tail. If the light source is above her, there should be some bottom shading on the tail. 22:56, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Just for clarificaiton, the light source is coming in <--- direction (from the right going to the left) and is a source that has been used multiple times. ^^ 23:05, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Almost all of my StarClan images have used this light source. Unless there's an overwhelming number of people who have a problem with it, I'm not changing it. If that was the case, all of them would need to be tweaked/redone. 15:34 Thu Nov 8

I just think that maybe the head or body shading needs defining? Might be nitpicky though, sorry  ^ ^" Malina457 (talk) 17:00, November 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Blazepaw (A) ~ CBA
my son is too important to me. 01:54, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

He's adorable! Maybe this is just my screen, but Blazepaw almost looks muddy along the whites of his legs and belly. Otherwise this is so good! You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   patience.

I believe that's the shading. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Storm! ^^ And yes, that's the shading. Would you like me to smooth it or lighten it or... 01:59, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps just lighten it a little? I'm very new to this whole approval process, so you don't have to take my advice. You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   <span style="color:gold;font-family:Nothing You Could Do;font-size:18pt;text-shadow:darkslategray 2.5px 1.5px 1px;">patience.

Reups :P Nah, your gut was on point. Never be afraid to mention something. 02:13, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten it more.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:16, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 02:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

A tad bit more. My apologies if I'm driving you crazy.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:11, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

The shading looks fine imo Malina457 (talk) 04:12, November 6, 2018 (UTC)malina

Yeah, any lighter/darker and it'll look weird, especially with this light source.

is it possible to define the shading on the ginger a wee bit? 00:24, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 00:30, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 15:14, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Flaxkit (K) ~ For Approval


This is my first one! :D Queen 02:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC) <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

define shading, this also need renamed to File:Flaxkit.kit.png <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:27, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

To add on a little bit, I can see no shading at all myself, so try to define it as much as you can while it keeping it looking good. This part is just an idea to try if you think it might work, but maybe try darkening. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:36, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

The shading should be darker now, if not, I'll have to see what I can do so that everyone can still see the design. The file name has been renamed. Anything else? Queen 02:42, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

The shading still needs defining and the file needs to be renamed Malina457 (talk) 03:43, November 6, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Although eye color is artist's choice, his eyes are looking gray-white.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:16, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Friendly reminder not to align your images ^^ 17:47, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I made his pelt color a bit lighter, so the shading should be more defined that way. His eyes are amber instead of blue and the file name should be renamed. Anything else? Queen 22:17, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

The shading still needs some defining and the eyes need to have black pupils Malina457 (talk) 23:28, November 6, 2018 (UTC)malina

Hopefully this is better ;-; Queen 23:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC) <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Define the shading on the neck and head. And when you upload, make sure you re-upload over File:Flaxkit.kit.png and not as a new image. When you're ready to upload, just go to his file that I linked and hit Upload a new version of this file and follow the prompts. That way there's only one image. It will also automatically show the current version everywhere. 00:16, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

What is the color of his eyes? They are still gray-white on my screen.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:21, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the earpink? it seems to blend in with the pelt a bit too much. Great job on your first charart!

21:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Are changes showing? His eyes are still gray-white. And I really don't think it's my tablet.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:52, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Have patience, Potato. They haven't reuploaded yet and it hasn't even been a full 24 hours since you last commented. 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

This has been told to you before, Potato. The kit blank only has 3 pixels for color. The eyes are fine. You can clearly tell what color they are. The blank is just small and a pain to work with in general. <span style="">15:36 Thu Nov 8

Sunkit (Ki) ~ CBA
hi it me, this isn't the best but I do like the way it turned out. I'll probably add texture later on. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:31, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, added texture. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:37, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

This could totally just be my screen and if you think it's fine that's alright, but the earpink color kind of blends into the body color a little bit and is hard to see for me, but it may just be my screen messing up colors. If it's fine to you though, totally leave it! I just find it hard to distinguish the color of the pink to the body. I just thought i'd put it out there. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:40, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I can see it just fine but if someone else comments on it, I'll totally darken it a bit. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:42, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Squidward. The ear pink is very hard to see. And since this is a brown and white tabby I think the color could stand to be less yellow and more brown. As it stands he looks like a golden and white tabby. On top of that, smooth out the shading everywhere.

It's a lighter brown, but still brown. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:55, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I have to say that it still looks more gold than it does brown, and personally think that it could be changed a bit to look more brown, even if the color chosen was a lighter brown, this still looks gold. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:57, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Re-Ups, I was going with more of a yellow-brown because of her name. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:22, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

When did you reserve this, cause ir eserved it too Malina457 (talk) 03:27, November 6, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I reserved it at 7, I just checked and I did reserve it first. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:28, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Removed mine, sorry about that Malina457 (talk) 03:32, November 6, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Its all good <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:34, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head a bit and the light on the hind paw? 17:48, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I also defined the texture a bit as well. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 00:31, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 15:16, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Shellpaw (App Alt) ~ For Approval
ok this looks weird. i'll try and fix the pale stuff later

Um.. this is an alt. Shellpaw is white, so I'm changing the heading to include "Alt". If you haven't renamed the file, do that now.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:04, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Heading Renamed.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:06, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading? Malina457 (talk) 04:10, November 6, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define earpink. It matches the shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:13, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

can you define it a bit more around the tail/butt area? also there's a patch of black that looks lighter than the others around there, or at least a darker bit cuts abruptly into it. 00:29, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Could you highlight where?

Re-uploaded

Quailpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 03:14, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

could you lighten the shading, it looks a bit too dark <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:23, November 6, 2018 (UTC) Reuploaded. 03:26, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten it a little more.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:08, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any lighter, and I fear it will be hard to see. 04:16, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Don't worry, there's no need. Well, maybe lighten it on the chest?

Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:21, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Could you brighten the image up? this looks pale gray, when it should be white. ​​

Reuploaded. Changed the shading tint a bit. 22:51, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the shoulder just a bit? 00:10, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:19, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading on his flank area and define the light on the legs? 00:23, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:29, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the base of the tail a bit? 16:05, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:50, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Moss that Grows by River (CG) ~ For Approval
v sure this is a redo so here she is, I'll fix the shading later. Something about it looks off to me. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 09:57, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, much happier now. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 10:07, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

CG blank redos do not count towards the one image limit. This is perfectly fine. Anyways, smooth out the shading, please. ^^ ​

Define the shading a bit as well.

16:22, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Not sure how to word this, but do you mind if I have this back? Moss was my image before the redos, as I was the most recent artist to tweak it over a year ago. I wasn't sure how to approach it when TRS came out and didn't know about the redo rule (whoops ¯\_(ツ)_/¯) and only just now got back to the wiki and saw this in place. I withdrew it with the intention of coming back to it because I tweaked Moss forever ago...unless I'm misinformed about tweaking = ownership. 17:45, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I'd count that as an original, yeah go ahead. I don't mind I'll do one of the others then. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:33, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Taking over. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! 00:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful once again, Vec! But the shading on her toes is a bit overblurred, would you mind smoothing it a bit? Very nitpicky, feel free to ask for a second opinion. You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   <span style="color:gold;font-family:Nothing You Could Do;font-size:18pt;text-shadow:darkslategray 2.5px 1.5px 1px;">patience.

Smoothing entails blurring it more. Did you mean sharpening it? And which toes? All of them? 02:15, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Or did you mean there is too much shading and there needs to be more light visible on them? 02:16, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the far front toes, yeah Malina457 (talk) 04:12, November 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups 05:35, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Bird That Rides the Wind (CG) ~ For Approval
Reposting bc it doesn't count towards the limit.

can you define and perhaps expand the shading slightly everywhere? 00:22, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add a stripe near the base of the tail?Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:06, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded for the stripe thing I'm going to hold that off unless someone else agrees because on her other images (loner specifically) there doesn't seem to be stripes there

Gullpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Assuming I'm allowed to have this up right now, here it is. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:41, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a lot please. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:43, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded hopefully I haven't under or over-defined the shading.<font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:41, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Would the shading on the back be there with the source your going with? <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:47, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did my best to get rid of the shading from the back. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:54, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Add some more shading on the lower chest, stomach, and --> side of the shoulder 00:10, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 12:20, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

define the shading on the tail, and there's also waste leaking from it. 00:21, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Feel like maybe I added too much shading onto the tail now, but not sure. i'll just reup it anyway. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 12:27, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define shading on both ears.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:25, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the ears seems pretty fine to me. If somebody else agrees that I should definite it, then I will though <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 08:19, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I think it could be defined just a little in the ---> ear. Also, the shading is leaking on the chest where it meets the shoulder. 23:09, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Sunnypaw (A) ~ For Approval
I already know I messed up on naming this file fhkdjfgh. But regardless here she is. Matching colours was hard again but hopefully it looks okay! 05:25, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading and top stripe on the chest needs to cross the chest. 16:03, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:37, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Um.. there's a brown thing under <-- that eye. Is that meant to be there? It looks like she has s swollen eye.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:00, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shading was a bit dark under the eye, i tried lightening it so it looks a bit better! 23:07, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Spider (Lo) - For Approval
Spidey saves the day! Alt caption: how does one shade a black cat  H A W K  F I R E  19:31, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit on the shoulder, haunch, and back leg furthest from us? It's looking a bit blotchy. (And the answer is just give it your best shot lol) 22:58, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

You also need to define shading on the ear too.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:02, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Also I desaturated the ear pink cause it was super neon  H A W K  F I R E  23:57, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Flowerstem (AVoS) (W) ~ For Approval
20:35, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

this needs to be shorthaired. 20:57, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded whoops 21:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the limbs furthest from us.  H A W K  F I R E  23:42, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:43, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Hollowkit (Kit) ~For Approval
Really wanted to do a tabby, I feel like I might need to lighten this, and the eyes are orange, they're ust desaturated looking on here Malina457 (talk) 22:28, November 7, 2018 (UTC)malina

Smooth out the shading on the chest and tail just a bit? 23:00, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 03:17, November 8, 2018 (UTC)malina

Pigeonpaw (SC) (App) ~ For Approval
Hey look whos back and regressed too much. 🤮 22:47, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? Malina457 (talk) 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define and smooth shading, like Malina said. 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

There are some unfilled pixels on<-- that ear tip, can you fix that?Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:05, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's just the highlights on the pink ^^ 23:16, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading in <-- ear? On the front leg farthest from us there's a splotch of shading that looks a bit bold compared to the rest in the area, can you possibly blend it a little? Define the shading depth a bit on the shoulder. Lovely work!

23:39, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading and thanks Patch for the help! :D 00:13, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on <-- that hind pawHeyoitpotater (talk) 01:36, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the texture, especially on the shoulder Malina457 (talk) 03:53, November 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded 11:11, November 8, 2018 (UTC)