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The Sun Trail/Chapter 9 - Silver Nomination
I think that's the right nomination, my first time doing this so hopefully I did it right lol  Ellie  life is an illusion 23:26, April 28, 2019 (UTC)


 * Needs a main quote
 * We have a lot of lengthy subpages, but even those are shorter than one paragraph per page, and optimally much shorter because they're summarizing. This has a lot of extraneous detail that could be trimmed and sentences combined to come across as a not-rewrite of the novel, to be shorter than the chapter.
 * Bright Stream is missing from the mentioned list.
 * You actually might want to check and reread as at first glance Rainswept Flower and Quick Water are missing from the minor characters list, and there's more missing too.
 * I'd do a run through on grammar and missing links, as well.

Remove the italics in the paragraphs. It makes it sound un-summary like for a lack of better words. Only use them when mentioning a prophecy! 22:10, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

updated, will add the main quote soon  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:50, May 3, 2019 (UTC)


 * Still, you're missing characters. It wasn't just the ones I mentioned specifically; the chapter should be reread to catch them all, as that's the nominator's job.
 * For future nominations, be advised to link as much as you can, as it was missing most of them here. I've fixed everything else of note via copy-edit. Things such as past-tense, sentences without a cat/PoV identifier that are usually extraneous, wording such as 'still' and 'finally' isn't proper, no italics in summaries etc. Usually it'd be your job, but it's a bit tedious to comment on.

Still working?

The Fourth Apprentice/Chapter 15 - Silver Nomination
-- 06:06 Sun May 19

CBV? 03:29, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

The Fourth Apprentice/Chapter 16 - Silver Nomination
-- 05:37 Mon May 20

CBV? 03:29, May 23, 2019 (UTC)