Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 147

Jake (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Shinx. Tweaked to darken to match Firestar. 05:49, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

Color seems a little off compared to the kittypet; I feel like the kittypet is somewhat redder than this. Also, did you modify the chest? It looks hard edged. I think you should somehow smudge it a bit.

The chest is hard-edged, but to be fair, there are highlights on the kittypet, and this shade is around the color that the rogue is. 13:48, 6/11/2018

Reups I didn't modify the chest. I noticed the chest was a bit hard-edged when I was erasing/isolating that part from the tweaked layer, but I did go over it again and smudged it a bit. I hope that helps? Maybe it's also because of how stark the two colors are as compared to the original idk. 16:00, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 15:34, 6/13/2018

Jake (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA was Burntclaw. Tweaked to darken to match Firestar. 05:49, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

See above comment (except the chest is fine on this image)

Reups 16:00, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

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Palebird (Alt.Q) ~ Redone
22:08, June 11, 2018 (UTC)

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Flowerstar (L) ~ Tweaked
tweaked for placement issues and earpink color not matching the set, also ended up fixing blurry lineart

Can you shrink/remove the ginger patch from the belly? 00:07, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

24 hours. 02:59, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Palebird (W) - Tweaked
the only one who I'm going to listen to for white placement tweaking is David, since this is based off of their cat. ( 04:22, 6/13/2018 ) ​ ( 04:22, 6/13/2018 ) ​

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Gray Wing (L) ~ Tweaked
19:36, 6/13/2018

The tear looks too big compared to the star/early settler + there's waste around > ear

Fixed. 04:27, 6/14/2018

24 hours. 14:25, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Star) - Redone
19:58 Wed Jun 13 19:58, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Jumper (R) ~ Redone


There shouldn't be black on the chest I don't think

Reuploaded

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Crookedstar (D) - Tweaked
dorsal stripe. Most recent OA was Shinx.

Waste around <- front leg and <- back leg

reups there was a few more patches of waste. surprised it didn't get pointed out during approval

24 hours. 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Spiderleg (Ki) - Redone


Speck of waste on -> side of head

reups didn't see waste, but there was some blurry lineart for some reason

24 hours. 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt R) ~ Tweaked


24 hours. 13:31, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Q) - Redone
20:18 Wed Jun 13

The eye color looks different from the star's. 20:20, 6/13/2018

There's more space in the StarClan image to add color; I think it's fine.

I took it from the rogue for both, which was first in the set. 20:23 Wed Jun 13

The stripes on < leg on the star look thinner than the ones here

Reuploaded <span style="">22:29 Thu Jun 14

24 hours. 23:24, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Fleck (Lo) - Tweaked
Tweaked to remove white from face, most recent OA is Ivystripe. 14:42, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I know this isn't what it's up for, but could you perhaps add a slight amount of light to the tail?

Re-uploaded. 21:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:24, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Barley (Ro) - Redone
21:25, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

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Tigerstar (D) - Redone
23:05, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

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Skystar (L) ~ Tweaked
<span style="">19:36, 6/13/2018

same as millie, could you thicken the lineart just a little in a few places? 21:33, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Fixed. <span style="">13:13, 6/15/2018

24 hours. 13:19, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Houndleap (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was me. Tweaked to add <--- ear tip back. 02:19, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I know it isn't what it's up for but is it possible to soften the shading on the closest foreleg somewhat? 21:32, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I see it too, and I tried? 01:54, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 13:19, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Mudfur (MC) ~ Redone
Redone to match. Again, look at this shading. How wonderful it is ughhh 03:53, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Looks good! Would you add a bit of depth to the eyes, and perhaps make the shading a liiiittle less reddish?

Reups Thanks haha 13:49, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the pale parts^^ Also, I think there wouldn't be quite so many spots on the tail, to match the other images c:

Reups 20:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-why-can-I-not-be-happy-with-this-ups 01:46, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 13:19, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Palebird (Ki) ~ Redone
04:56, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

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Princess (KP) ~ Tweaked


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Willowshine (MCA) ~ Tweaked
23:41, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

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Willowshine (Ki) ~ Tweaked
23:41, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

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Millie (W) ~ Tweaked
<span style="">15:56, 6/14/2018

can you maybe thicken the lineart on the tear just a bit? 21:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Fixed. <span style="">13:09, 6/15/2018

I think the tear should be smaller, it looks like a tiny nick on the elder

I think it's the angle. <span style="">20:01, 6/15/2018

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Snipe (Ro) ~ Tweaked
tried to keep the black as accurate to the dark grey areas as possible. 23:28, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I don't think it was nominated for this, but do you mind defining the shading overall, especially on the legs? 01:48, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded just didn't want to touch it unless someone pointed it out first. 01:42, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

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Princess (Ki) - Tweaked
brown paw. OAs: spooky, bbun, and paleclaw

Why was the paw changed to brown? (I wasn't around when it was nominated)

Because it didn't match the other images in the set, each of which should have a brown paw. The kittypet is first in this set, and it has a brown paw.

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Jumper (L) ~ Tweaked


I think there's shading leaking from the lower back lineart (near the haunch) and along the tail. 01:04, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

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Gorseclaw (TC) (K) ~ Tweaked


There's some waste by the back paw

Reuploaded

24 hours. 14:05, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Mudfur (Star) - Redone
The shading looks very...weird, so I will probably redo it. 00:21, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the spots a bit. Would you like the file for one of his other chararts? 01:47, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, that would be excellent. 03:44, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 00:10, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the spots more, expand shading, I don't think the tailtip should be completely brown, and the earpink and nose should be lighter to match kit (original)

Re-uploaded: The tail tip is completely brown in his other images. 13:02, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws, tail, and chin/face area?

Re-uploaded: 21:43, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (A) ~ Redone
Hey everyone this is your host Vec and here's her latest rendition of "I can't do stripes" 20:53, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Don't worry, I can't do stripes either. Can you smooth out the shading?

Reups 01:48, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Princess (Q) ~ Tweaked


I think the shading is leaking along the belly fluff lineart 22:29, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Maybe smooth the belly shading just a tad? <span style="">18:33 Tue Jun 19

Reuploaded tried my best, don't have the file though

24 hours. 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Please let me know if I missed any cream or brown spots ^^ 22:28, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Fiddled with the shading a bit. 01:48, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

can you dull down the cream just a bit to match the warrior and the others? 22:36, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 22:59, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Leafpool (K) ~ Tweaked


24 hours. 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Tweaked
Just tweaked to get that piece of shading. 21:40, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (MC) - Redone
I'll get the torn ear in a minute. <span style="">18:20 Tue Jun 19

Reuploaded <span style="">18:32 Tue Jun 19

Again to turn herbs layer back on <span style="">19:04 Tue Jun 19

24 hours. 23:23, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Lo) ~ Redone
This. . . is not Cherrytail. This is her stunt-double who has decided she will fill in for Cherrytail. This pattern is also impossible for me.

The ginger color isn't as orangey as the other images, and there's waste around the image^^ The shoulder ginger would also be a little more broken up, as per the KP, and perhaps try to brighten the white

re-up gonna tweak that shading later

Could you define the shading on the paws and shoulder?

re-up

The paws seem a little too gray. <span style="">00:02, 6/21/2018

re-up

24 hours. 02:07, June 22, 2018 (UTC)