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Sunnytail (D) - Redone
spitting in younger me's face w/this new and improved ray of sunshine (:  22:09, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Idk if it's just me or if her shoulder shading is a bit... off?? I mean that always happens to me so idk me no like this black lines

Smooth out the shading, i can see the smudge marks. 05:54, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

The shoulder shading looks fine. 21:32, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw that is lifted up 09:49, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:45, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) ~ Redone
Round 2 05:14, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. So brambleclaw's warrior doesn't really go down and rise again. It's basically straight. Can you fix that? 13:13, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Thin the stripes a little and define the pale bit on the tail? 19:08, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

@Appledash, could u clarify, please? 05:30, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Ok so his chest is basically like goes down to the neck, and rises from the chest. On Brambleclaw's warriors, it's a straight line, and doesn't rise. I'm horrible at explaining tbh. 11:39, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (D) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Sandstar, Paleclaw, Shelly, and StormSongz. Tweaked to be lighter. When I changed the color the shading all but disapeared, and so I had to redo it. Ugh, this is terrible. 14:21, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add more depth to the shading and smooth it out. Also possibly thin it where it meets the midriff, and define it on the tail and all paws. 01:08, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  14:40, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more, please. 20:17, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  21:41, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading 13:12, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:59, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the forearm closest to us, please. 21:28, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:57, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA of the new blank was moi. I simply put the old colour back, but I also smoothed the shading on the belly, since it was that blocky type I used to do. 15:43, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Smooth / blur it. 01:08, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I actually personally think that the shading darkness and hardness is good as it is now. 09:47, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I have to agree with Icy.. but I think if she smooths it out a bit more, she wouldn't have to lighten it. The transition is a bit rough.

Thistleclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
I totally ruined it. >< OA is Nightshine, Redone artist is Ivystripe and tweakers are Ashshadow and me. Tweaked tom match description. Many credit and thanks to Burntclaw for sending in the apprentice file, and that made my life much easier. :) 08:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white 08:56, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

K so I smudged my white patches with a 10 px bristle brush and i did not smudge or blur the texture- i used a paint brush and added dark and light tones to show the light hitting the fur and the shadows to give his fur a "bristling" effect. Nice image, anyway =) 09:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the texture on the white please. 09:12, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

why does he have white paws? hes only speicifed white and grey on his face and shoulders. 11:03, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

nvm, cite got found 12:06, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

He looks like hes still mottled, is that intentional? 22:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

That's texture. There is tabby stripes I promise, it's just harder to see because it's a tiny image. 23:01, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more please, with a hard edged one px brush 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload If I have to turn the internet upside down to get a better smudge tool >< 07:21, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I'm going to be that person but I still seriously think you should smudge the white more ;; 13:13, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on his face isn't texture; it's little triangles that just throw the colour off...also, could you add a bit of depth to the shading? It's looking a bit flat. 13:15 Sat Oct 3

Reupload I'm being careful with the shading as the texture and stripes disappear when it gets too dark, and I'm near the brink. Everyone's fluffing up their Thistleclaw a lot! Do I need to fluff Thistlekit? 20:18, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

His other images appear to have a small bit of black near the eyes- do you mind adding that? The warrior and dark forest images show what I'm insinuating. 21:27, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't tell me to smudge it anymore, cause I did before and it somehow disappeared O.o. 21:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

White looks gray on the paws 23:57, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:03, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) ~ Redone
oa's include bramble, mintstarr, shelly, silver, and jayce who was awesome enough to give me this and upload for me ;-; 11:06 Fri Oct 2

This should use the old linear art- it wasn't nominated for a linear tweak. Very pretty btw, maybe try erasing a little bit of the texture on the edge of the paws and the face so that it would look less grey. 11:36, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Jayce told me they didn't mind me using new lineart; I'll change it if you want it, but... 12:19 Fri Oct 2

idk but I was told to do it in the past... So... 12:20, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I literally don't care either way. Given that it's explicitly stated he was named after his spiky fur, I think the more spikyness, the better. I was going to say that on the other images, but the apprentice was archived before I got the chance.

Should I nominate the apprentice? 12:26, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

If you believe it should be, yes. I mean, given that ragged fur can change over time, I don't think you'd need to 30000% match Berry's style, but he could use more spiky fur. Anyways, Berry, could you define the ear pink? I actually didn't think he had any the first time I saw this.

Blur/smudge the shading a bit? 16:04, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, personally. Smooth out that white patch on his cheek, it looks a little too sharp compared to the other patches. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:30, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Littlecloud (K) ~ Redone
*flails* OA was Skye. Redone to redo lol 00:18, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (DF) - Redone
Okay, so I may have slightly overdone the fluff. But I'm really happy with this. OA was me. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:26, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Waste on the back 03:30, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:37, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the white on the face, it looks grey. Smooth out the texture and shading on the shoulder. 03:42, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the fur tuffs more "spiky" like sharp ended? For now it's more like ragged than actually spiky.

I think the tail is a bit too fluffy. It was smaller on the other images. 16:06, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I put more white on the face to try and make it look less gray, and made the fur more spiky. I think the white on his shoulder looks about as sharp as on the warrior, so I think it's fine, but if someone else objects I'll blur it a little, and for the tail I was trying to make it look more ragged and disheveled, since it was agreed that ragged fur can change over time. But it might be a bit too long if it wasn't that long on other images... I'll thin it out a bit on the next update. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:27, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, the image you are matching is my apprentice, where the shoulder texture is much more lighter and fainter. 00:15, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Ooh he's a so floofy Is the lifted paw a little grey? Amazing. 02:06, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Flowerpaw (Star) - Redone
OA is Stormsongz, redone to match. If Storm wants it, i will surrender this. 05:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you can change the eyes.

Every redone image of mine I had the eyes redone too...? 07:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ccccccrap bleh I thought this was tweaked omg sorry I'm just too dumb to even look

Um im sorry?????? This is still mine, it is still the third Storm  &#9835;  13:03, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

It's until the 3rd. You had all week to post it. 13:06, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I dont wanna be that person but dont you get the whole day it ends to have it until? Correct me if im wrong 13:07, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, no. That's only how some of us like to do it, like me. I do it to try and give the person the benefit of the doubt in thinking that they're busy, but it's not a rule in the project.

Storm says you can have it.and i quote:" shell probably do better than me anyway. And i was busy." She just said that last bit 13:23, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the markings? 16:07, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Storm: Burnt calmly says that if you wanted it, she would surrender it for you to do. I personally think saying what you said in that particular manner was a bit uncalled for    ┐(´-｀)┌ Could you blur the tail shading near the tail-tip a tad? 17:14 Sat Oct 3

The smallest speckles are blurred on the apprentice 19:14, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the darker tail-tip. 19:16, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

How do you know it's blurred? It looks smudged... 01:57, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Because Storm told me how she did it. She used a tool that had the specks already blurred, and she said there's a darker tail-tip. 02:20, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Second try, tweaked to define shading

Can you smooth out the shading just a tad? It just looks a little hard-edged. 00:44, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) - Tweaked
He has Xanthe fur! 06:19, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Fluff up his butt and the base of histail a bit. It looks a bit weird to have it flat and then...poof. 06:37 Sat Oct 3

Featherwhisker (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA was Breeze, tweaked for define and redo shading 20:35, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Nettlebreeze (E) ~ Redone
OA is me. Redone to match. I couldn't sum up to Shinx's awesome skills... :( 21:51 Sat Oct 3

I'll add the rheumy eyes and he ragged fur in my next upload. Oops. 21:53 Sat Oct 3

Don't forget the cloudy eyes! :) The colour doesn't seem to match the other images. His a bit orange-r than the others. (Is that even a word? Orange-r?) 22:00, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Did you add the layer of texture? There's a very light one on the apprentice, I'm not sure if you added it or not. This looks gorgeous. :) The color is fine, I think. I sent Hawky the file, the colors will probably be colorpicked fro that. I use highlights on my images, which makes them look a bit brighter. 22:10, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 01:17, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading's fine. 01:23, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, Shinx. I used texture. I made sure you could barely see it, because you can barely see it on the apprentice. 3:03 Sun Oct 4

No, it's really not @Apple. Please smooth it out some more on the legs 03:04, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

In my opinion it is. Literally it looks blurred as it is but if someone else disagrees then I guess. 03:05, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is fine, tbh. 03:06, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Tom (ES) (Ro) ~ Redone
i think i forgot the nick....ill get that later. 00:36, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA is DJAngelCandy. Tweaked for flat shading. 00:50, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the light on the legs? 02:01, October 4, 2015 (UTC)