Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 67

Berrynose (alt. kit) - Approved
Berrykit without his tail. Comments? Rain breath  11:41, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tail look more natural-perhaps make the cuts less straight. 15:28, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger, and darken the shading on the left side (our left). 18:09, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pinkish. Look at Berrynose's chararts for reference. Anyways, nice job! ♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 18:27, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

On his warrior charart the tail isn't all zig-zaggy, and it looks a little odd that way anyway. Looks nice, though! ;) 23:56, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading between the front legs. 00:26, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The tail looks a bit funny XD Bloodangel Starshine  12:15, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Try to copy the tail design from his apprentice image. 15:51, December 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * Nevermind. It looks fine. 15:55, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

There is some gray spots outside of his tail, erase those. 18:43, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tail a little fluffier looking. Right now it's just a stub-- 19:09, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'd add a small pink scar at the tip of his tail, as his wound would've been pretty recent. Scarlet wind Medicine Cat of SolarClan 03:08, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The tail doesn't look funny. It looks better. I'm so happy =D Bloodangel Starshine  15:17, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading below the chin; on the neck. 21:07, December 20, 2010 (UTC)


 * That area of shading isn't required. 23:39, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it matters that it's not required, it would look good and is easy to add, it's not like asking to add in highlights or anything. 05:21, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? Bloodangel Starshine  12:08, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading under the neck and darken it a bit.-- 16:03, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. 05:50, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bloodangel Starshine  08:44, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. :) The tail must've been hard to do. XD Anyways, there are scraps of shading under the chin, as well as on the tail. They look really blotchy. Could you try blurring them in or completely redoing them? :3 -- 14:17, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken or brighten the earpink a tad. :) 21:12, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 04:15, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine--can I take over? 02:53, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I didnt had a pc so I can`t work on it. I`ll work tomorrow on it (sorry vor my bad spelling) Bloodangel Starshine  18:46, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Comments? Bloodangel Starshine  19:25, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading in the chest area a LOT, smudge it a bit if you want. 20:51, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading-- night  shine  ❄ 02:09, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest a bit more and on the face it looks as if there's a stripes of darker shading running through it. Maybe try to take that out? 21:29, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is it better? Bloodangel Starshine  09:04, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit. 18:12, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and move the chest highlight up. Right now it looks like it's on his legs XD --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:26, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

The chest hi-lite is a little blotchy.  Mistfire Epic Fail  05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone do that for me? It doen't work when I do it. It still looks blotchy. Bloodangel Starshine  09:25, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

I can blur it, if you want, but I'm going away for a few days, so probably won't be able to do anything 'til Monday or Wednesday... so if somebody else wants to do it...? --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 08:01, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blured the ear pink more. I'd be happy, if you blur it for me, Wildheart. <font color="DarkRed" style="background:white">Bloodangel Starshine  16:39, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  17:47, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm heading out to soccer practice but I'll do it as soon as I can. I would be happy to blur it for you =] --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:31, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it for you. Hope I helped =) --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:01, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

It looks beautiful. Thank you =D <font color="DarkRed" style="background:white">Bloodangel Starshine  10:00, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

No problem =) Perhaps brightent the earpink some --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:38, February 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes, the earpink needs to be more, well, pink. -

 UNI  01:02, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights just a tad. 01:23, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  16:48, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too dark, brighten it some.<span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:khaki;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  01:10, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? <font color="DarkRed" style="background:white">Bloodangel Starshine  14:12, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more on his right side. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 22:11, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Rainbreath? <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 02:45, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a touch more noticeable.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:03, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. This is a really great charart so if someone wants to just touch up the ear pink it will be ready. -- Night  shine  05:36, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do it. Working on it now, will reupload in a sec. --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:05, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Even though I absolutely despise doing kit pixel earpink, I did it. If it looks worse, we can wait for Rainbreath to get back and do it. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:18, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink needs to be shrunk and blurred.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  02:15, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a reddish pink colour-- Night  shine  05:17, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hey guys, I was really busy so, sorry. And thank you for working on it Wildheart. I have worked on it so I will upload it tomorrow or at Wednesday. <font color="DarkRed" style="background:white">Bloodangel Starshine  15:50, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

YAY YOU'RE BACK! --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:49, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Ok, here he is! I hope it looks better. <font color="DarkRed" style="background:white">Bloodangel Starshine  18:46, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--- Night  shine  02:27, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

None; approved-- Night  shine  00:03, March 5, 2011 (UTC)