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Dawncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
Boom. All colors colorpicked from the elder that Jayie has for approval. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:06, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on her belly a bit (I know it's artist's choice but it seems a little too dark), and I don't think her stripes really match the other images, but that might just be me 20:04, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I can't do anything with the stripes. I copied from the elder best I could. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:26, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

It could just be me, but the base coat looks a little light. 10:21 PM, Tue Jul 29, 2014

I think it's because of the highlights. Maybe dull them some? Wow... *o* 22:26 Tue Jul 29

the stripes don't match, possible add more. 01:07, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too thin, and there should be striping on the head. I think the highlighting might be a little too bright as well compared to the other Dawncloud images, but that might be up to artist preference, not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:10, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled the highlights, thickened the stripes, and lightened the face shading so you could see the face stripes. I matched the stripes the best I could, and spent about two hours on them. I even pasted the Elder on another layer to use as reference. Queens' bellies are stretched, so so is the pattern, to be fair. (And Duck, adding more stripes probably won't make it match more, because she never had more stripes then this in the first place) Pls don't kill me  Shinxy  Blitz  and  Melody  09:08, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Does she have texture, or is that just the way you've done the shading? 11:35, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

It's shading. I smudged rather then blurred. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:05, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, if you look at her StarClanner, she does have more stripes than this facing this way, adding more, would make it match more. 17:47, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. OK, Shinx confirmed for derp. Added some more stripes, although I don't have room for any more. If someone complains, I'll just redo them. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:37, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit its desaturating her colors. 22:45 Wed Jul 30 2014

There's waste under the belly and on the front leg farthest to us. Brick  09:33, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:58, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 19:11, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a teeny bit. This is lovely. *.*

Re-uploaded Thank you! Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

make the stripes more pixel-y 18:31, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

I'm afraid I can't, I tried. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:53, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

You can't unblur them?

Nope. I used the sharpen tool, and it won't work any more. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  19:17, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

try filters>enhance>sharpen, because the stripes on the other images look more pixel-y and less blurred than this image and it's causing this image not to match as well as the others. 14:00, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  17:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the two front legs. This is really good :).--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:20, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded TY! Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:08, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be sharpened a bit more- the ones on her other images are a bit smoother and unblurred.

Re-upped OK, I can't sharpen them any more now. I'll get these random multicolored pixels everywhere, including in the stripes, and that'd be heck to get rid of. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:37, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

This looks really good! Tigerbird-The-Great 14:20, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment! However, please don't SPAM.. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:17, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Duskfur (Q) - For Approval
Changes are here.

define the belly, tail, and chest shading a tick? <span style="">11:27 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading since I didn't like the first one and shading this isn't as easy as it looks.

Try making the stripes curve some more. 01:41, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

They don't curve at all on the warrior. If I made them curve, I think it would divert from the original pattern. Pregnant or not, I don't want to teeter too far away from the pattern Twee made, and they don't curve very much on the original queen image or warrior (I was trying to match the warrior and queen both tbh), so unless someone else agrees, I'd really rather not change it.

Yes, but just because of the perspective, I think they should bend like (((( a bit, because if she's coming towards you the stripes would bend that way, as would the belly. It's less about the pregnancy and more about the perspective. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:48, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Perspective over pattern. Makes sense. Re-uploaded. Changes.

Perhaps define the shading on the tail? This is really good, Snow. =)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:53, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not much I can do with that since the pale parts are shaded differently and it's hard to define it totally without basically killing the pale parts on the tail. Changes are here.

Red (SD) (Ki) ~ For Approval
02:37, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink. I want this plz Imma steal it from you.

David is a nerd and should probably reupload this if he's still working on it.

Frost (StarClan) - For Approval
Did I do a good job? Tigerbird-The-Great 16:59, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, needs a texture, and the image isn't the right size. For the texture, I recommend asking David, the artist of Frost's rogue image, how he made his.

On Frost's page, It says he's thick furred. Tigerbird-The-Great 17:11, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thick fur does not mean long-haired. I have thicker hair, but it wasn't always as long as it is. I used to have it fairly shorter when I was younger, and it was pretty dang thick. The thickness refers to the density of the fur, not the length. Plus, you have an an image to match, and David uses the short-furred blank.

Define and darken the shading a tick, and blur the earpink. Very nice job on this. If it helps, for thick furred cats, to make the shading look less flat, I do two layers of dark blue shading, instead of black. <span style="">5:43 PM, Sat Aug 9, 2014

Did you shrink the lineart at all? It looks much smaller than it should and I don't think it's just displaying as a thumbnail Brick   09:58, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve this before posting it. If you're not gonna reserve it, I'll just decline it again. =P I told you this when you posted it before, and in chat, Tiger.

^ I also told Tiger in one of her lessons. Also, there's waste around the tail, and random black around the earpink. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:53, August 10, 2014 (UTC'''

Re-ups here: http://tinypic.com/r/21a9v1u/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 03:00, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink and maybe dull it a tad as it looks a bit neon right now. Also blur the texture a bit. And the tail suggest the lightsource for the shading is coming from the lower left, but the body suggests it's coming from upper right? Brick  07:51, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste around the head and the base of the tail. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:08, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups here: http://tinypic.com/r/14uci00/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 14:54, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

You still need to blur the earpink more. I also see waste outside of the tail, a black spot near his ear, and the image needs to be resized. He's also looking a bit cross eyed... so perhaps look at other StarClan images to see where the eyes are focused. I'd define the eye depth a little more, too. <span style="">4:21 PM, Mon Aug 11, 2014

Re-up here: http://tinypic.com/r/29wmxr6/8 Also thanks for the tips! Tigerbird-The-Great 17:01, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred. <span style="">17:37 Mon Aug 11

Unblurred lineart here: http://tinypic.com/r/sgpidg/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 17:45, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail, face, and leg shading, (read: add another layer of slightly less blurred shading, it makes it a appear darker while still being on the same opacity as the original layer, give or take), and perhaps the belly shading a little more too. Nice job on the eyes. <span style="">6:05 PM, Mon Aug 11, 2014

The color seems top be overlapping onto the lineart. Is your lineart layer the top one? <span style="">19:52 Mon Aug 11

You need to upload over File:Frost.star.png and post that image here. Just uploading it to tinypic doesn't show the changes here.

I fixed the charart alignment for you. Darken his texture a tad. His texture is a bit darker on his rogue image. Also, Define and add depth to his overall shading, and smudge/blur the earpink. And a little depth to his eyes wouldnt hurt either. Good charart for a beginner :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:23, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Changing heading to For Approval and promoting you, since you know what to do and understand the basics of making chararts. You also need to use the file I linked for reuploading. That is, again, File:Frost.star.png. Using anything else won't work with the template. I can rename it for you.

Uh, the image you just placed on this page belongs to Breezeheart. Did you make a mistake and upload the wrong file or something? That art isn't yours.

I fixed the alignment for you, again. Thank you for changing it. Define the overall shading. Also, what Snow meant, is to reupload over my old image, not post my image instead of your own. When you go to the link she gave you, there is a button that says "Reupload with new file". Reupload this image to it, and that should be the place you keep reuploading, not posting new images everytime.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:06, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Please remember when uploading to make sure the image has the file name ONLY, and nothing like left, right, center, or thumb next to it, to avoid mucking up the page formatting. <span style="">10:28 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

hey guys, please remember that wikia sometimes automatically aligns the image, it's no big deal if someone has to fix it. thanks. 19:16, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

The texture doesn't flow with the fur on the head. <span style="">19:20 Thu Aug 14

I think the texture is a bit too thick, thin it out and have a bit more of it, and make sure it flows with the direction of the fur, not just going straight across the body. Have it follow the curve of the cheek, the nose, the forehead, the slope of the back, and so on. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:04, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

The texture seems a little dark, and the shading is blotchy. <span style="">8:09 PM, Thu Aug 14, 2014

There's waste everywhere. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:52, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Duck, it only auto-aligns if you're not using source mode. It never aligns for me and I only use source. Visual is sometimes a pain in the rear and that's what auto-aligns it. Visual mode is nasty as heck and I hate it lmao source mode is the best thing ever. While I'm commenting, it appears that there are random patches of shading that have vanished or look like they've been erased.. also darken the ear pink a bit as it doesn't quite match the shade used on the rogue.

FYI: The color used for the earpink and nose is #9a6d6d in hex color mode. You can download a picture of it to coloprick from here <span style="">10:08 PM, Thu Aug 14, 2014

Thanks! I'll Re upload soon! Tigerbird-The-Great 23:29, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Try using a 1x brush, and make little strokes throughout the image following the natural way the fur grows, and smudge it with a 1x brush, then play with the opacity until its not as dark.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:41, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

There are bits of missing shading on his paws and tail 09:35, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Echomist (Q) - For Approval
05:01, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Can you upload the changes somewhere? I can't see them.

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba18240393863200.png 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

The pattern fades into the shading, and I think the smudged shading should be thinner? This appears really thick in certain places, like the tail, and it throws it off..

re-uploaded 02:07, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Gonna harass you to upload the changes to ezimba again, dear. Might as well do that by default for a bit, since image changes aren't showing again. =/

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140813C/ezimba18240326878900.png 21:45, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge/whatever and add depth to the shading quite a bit. <span style="">2:20 Wed Aug 13

reuploaded 22:40, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is leaking out of her left ear. Brick  05:40, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded arg waste is annoying 19:16, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading.

Lilystem (Q) - For Approval
Oh lawdy ;-; Brick  10:29, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

http://i61.tinypic.com/33ttehg.png, the wiki is having one of those "I won't update images" days. Brick 10:30, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes, and smudge them. 12:53, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

she looks a bit cross-eyes 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2lar3m8.png, I didn't change the eyes because she doesn't look that cross eyed, more like she's looking at where she's walking. If someone else agrees that she looks derpy eyed I'll change it thought. Brick 14:44, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Duck; she does look a bit cross-eyed.

Re-ups,''' http://i57.tinypic.com/34t5nx3.png     and i must admit on second looking the old eyes did make her look overly interested in whatever she was staring at. Maybe she had just read that Rainflower was actually Stormkit and Oakkit's mother? '''

Try smudging the stripes the way of the belly, like on the warrior image. 17:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/23vymmh.png ;-; Brick  10:11, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her legs; she's purrtyy 09:37, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Pinestar (W) - For Approval
With as popular is The Ultimate Guide was, I'm shocked no one caught this. They called him a warrior..and Reedfeather got one for similar usage. They said "warrior-turned-kittypet", meaning he was a ThunderClan warrior at one point. I didn't know whether or not to give him his torn ear/scarred muzzle, so I did anyways just to be safe, but I can remove it if necessary. I fricken love Pinestar<3

Define the shading on the forelegs. 03:07, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Owl Feather (Alt. Q) - For Approval
changes 12:31, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on tail and foreleg furthest from us. She's preeeeeety. also guys changes are showing up on mobile for most images <span style="">1:46 AM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

Maybe sharpen the white just a little bit?

reuploaded 02:07, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define your leg light she's lovely can I steal her 09:39, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (Star) ~ For Approval
He needed a StarClan image. Colorpicked from both his Kit and Apprentice images. I know this probably doesnt match 100%, but this was kinda fun to do =).

I used a blue tint for the shading. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:14, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the markings a bit (not a whole lot, I'd say) using a smaller, harder-edged brush.

'''Re-uploaded. '''I used a 1x brush to smudge it, (It was smudged already, but i smudged it a bit more.) And i also added some highlights since i forgot to add that when i first uploaded.

If changes arent showing, go here: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=30j1cie&s=8#.U-qGq-NdVKY

Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:29, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Mmhmm. Now, could you darken those same spots a little bit and shade the ear pink? If you want to shade the ears, that is. It's not mandatory.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Darkened spots and smudged them a tad bit more. I didnt want to shade the earpink, since it was throwing off the color of the pink. I will add shading there if someone else points that out, though. Is that better?

If changes arent showing: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=20b1sw8&s=8#.U-qKneNdVKY~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:47, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

okay, on his other images he has a very light layer of lighter gray texture under his dapples and a very light layer of darker texture under his dapples, he also needs tiny specks hthroughout the image, I achieved it by using a bristle brush on size 10, but you can probably just use a size 1 or 2 and add them throughout. 22:38, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Added layers of lighter gray texture and darker gray texture, added specks, and also darkened spots a tiny bit since the textures made them look faint before. Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:06, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt Q) - For Approval
Colorpicked from Paleggy's version. Changes here. <span style="">10:06 PM, Tue Aug 12, 2014

She needs a pale muzzle. She is shown with one.

reup  <span style="">12:17 AM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

You linked the wrong image. That's a kit image. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:54, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reupped and fixed the link above ^^ <span style="">6:41 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

Darken the shoulder shading just a bit.

Define the light on the hindleg farthest from us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:54, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

re-up changes <span style="">10:34 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

Blur the shading a tiiiiny bit more? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:39, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, I think it's good. If she blurs it anymore, I think she would end up getting told to define it again.

Define the shading on the face and give the shading on the belly some more depth 22:48, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Star) ~ For Approval
Beep. 03:02, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

I'm having a rough time seeing the ear pink in -> ear. Perhaps shift some layers around?

re-up 02:43, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

I love the eyes c: define/add a bit of shading inside the ear and blur the highlight on the chest 22:47, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

re-up i think the chest highlight is fine but i messed with the ear shading a bit 02:38, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Deerleap (Star) ~ For Approval
I love Deerleap :3 21:30, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Expand/define the earpink. And remember to sign your posts with ~ ~ ~ ~, mystery member! :3 Brick  21:47, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge where the white meets the gray a bit more, also, smudge the tail tip also. and define the overall shading.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:50, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Better? SziriXxX (talk) 22:21, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps add some depth to her eyes? also, is her muzzle and chest supposed to be white, or a pale gray?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:26, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

It shouldn't be either. Also, lighten up her legs- they should be white.

Re-ups Darkened chest and muzzle,lightened legs and added eye depth. SziriXxX (talk) 22:48, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Mind defining; NOT darken, the shading on the legs? also, i can barely see the earpink in the ---> ear. ~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:54, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Defined leg shading and lightened earpink SziriXxX (talk) 23:25, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

I see a white pixel on her tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:27, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Got rid of the white pixel SziriXxX (talk) 23:41, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the front paw shading. 13:31, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 18:16, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt. W) - For Approval
maow c: 23:23, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define that pesky tail shading. He be sexy. 8D

Re-uploaded 03:35, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define your back leg shading He be sexy indeed Snow :o 09:33, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother (Q) - For Approval
I am insanely happy with this. Not sure it totally matches though. Suggestions? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:22, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Oh, and here's the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140815C/ezimba13931876423800.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:23, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit.

Blurred the stripes, thinned out the darkest stripes, added a bit of texture, and basically just revamped it and made it match the other image more. I think it matches way better now. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:49, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

I also changed the shading to match better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:44, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shattered Ice (Warrior) ~ For Approval
Heyyy :D Missed you all so much <3 Alrighty, so it's my first image back so don't go too rough on me..if you hate the tinted shading let me know. But black shading didn't make it look good at all. The pattern is a real pattern, but if you hate that let me know. Not bad for my first one in a while. :) Comment away!  18:33, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

The gray and white dosen't quite match the rogue image, and he needs to be long haired. 18:35, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Whoops sorry, my bad. Didn't know there was a rogue image. I'll redo it. 18:38, August 15, 2014 (UTC)