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Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
"me? i loved him."

Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

re-up

This might sound a bit weird, but can you lessen the shading a touch inside the ear? Cats' ears can be on the translucent side so I don't think the shadows would be quite that dark 04:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-up nah you're good

I think the haunch should show more of the stripes; the MC here does show some that aren't consistent with this placement of 'em. I know the queen came first, but there's also some parts that aren't visible on the queen that should be made to match the MC.

Still working? 17:40, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

re-up, spooky can you point out where the stripes should be idk if i got what you were saying.

here. they should, discounting the slight angle the MC is at, resemble that

Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg

as a head's up, go ahead and start matching the pale blue-gray shade you see in the old one's prior revisions, we're swapping her and Mistystar to be pale due to a LS cite, per PC

'''Reuploaded! ''' Is this the right one? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  23:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add just a little more light to the muzzle, specifically on << side of the face, as its in more light?

With your source, I think the top part of your >tail wohld be in light as it has shading on too to bottom and that doesn't make since with the source so if you could fix that  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:45, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little light to the top of the paws 04:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There are also three pixels of waste between the hind paw and the front <--- paw. 22:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading depth to the haunch, it still comes off as flat-ish imo compared to the rest of the image

Ambermoon (Alt K) - For Approval
love the new blanks. Very cute 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand shading  Ellie  life is an illusion 01:17, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:48, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the tail from the haunch shading. 01:09, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  02:02, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading. 16:13, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define it some when you do expand it  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:11, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's always shading... you'd think I'd know how to do it by now 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source- where is the light coming from? 19:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's coming from the left--where her face is. How would you emphasize that? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

With that, there shoud be no shading on the top of the tail. 22:52, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

To add to Potato's comment, to make it as coming to face, there wouldn't be any shading on the < side of the haunch either, the shading on the bottom of the tail would extend to the tailtip, there'd be more on the > side of the arm, and some extending to the chin.

Reuploaded Completely redid shading. With my luck, probably made it worse, but, whatever 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Switch your haunch shading to the other side. 20:14, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needn’t go so high up the backbone. Also - the haunch is unshaded. Should be some to form the shape of the bum; kinda how it is on some of the other images around.

The shading needs expanded quite a bit  Ellie  life is an illusion 21:28, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --mutters something incoherent about shading-- 02:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

the tail shading could be expanded a bit more.

03:08, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

The shading still goes too far up the back

Reuploaded Fixing the back was harder than I anticipated... 03:22, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I believe, since we're matching former images, that the base on this needs to be slightly lighter and the white more smooth and less defined

I color-picked off the original... 02:39, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

I checked as well, when I commented. Yours, is the darker of the two color swatches, from a spot with no highlights.

Appledawn (W) ~ For Approval
It's the only one of the set, so there's nothing I have to be matching, right? I also don't know if I'm happy with the eyes or texture... 00:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

We recently agreed to match the old images, so this would have to match the old warrior. But I think the colors match close enough with the exception of the eye color and ear pink...the stripes should be curlier. 01:04, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading and shading depth?

Define the light and the pupil in the eye 02:22, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be a bit thicker.  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:39, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, that was painful. Am I allowed to keep the texture? I don't think the old one had any... 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It did not have texture, as far as I'm aware.

Do I have to remove it, then? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It does have to match the old image, so yeah

Reuploaded Well, that's annoying that I wasted so much time w/ the texture, but at least it's easy to undo 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, and expand it on the back?

Reuploaded One of these days I'll know how to do shading... 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Practice makes perfect! With this source, there would not be shading on  >> that side of the haunch. There would also be shading on the top of the most visible hind leg, and the bottom tail shading where the tail touches the ground would be on the top part, not the bottom. 04:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading from the flank leaking onto the top of the haunch. Could you add depth to the hind leg and foot, along with the front legs? Perhaps expand the shading on the front leg and connect it to the shoulder too? If you're trying to match the original image, I think the stripes could stand to be a bit more... wavy? I'm not sure what word to use to describe it. The earpink in <- ear looks a little duller than what you have in the other, it looks a little off. This image is turning out great! 18:25, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded And the autopsy reveals: Death by shading! As for the other comments: 1. Could I please have a second opinion before I redo the stripes again? 2. The earpink in both ears is the same, but the shading tint is throwing off the left ear, and I'm open to suggestions on how to fix that. 02:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

the earpink is leaking

03:08, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

The stripe pattern doesn't match the prior image, so that does need to be fixed. Whether you tweak what you have or redo them is up to you - whatever gets it there

Reuploaded Third times's a charm! Now I know why I've never done tabbies that already had some done... I'm honestly not sure this came out any better 03:22, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste at the very end of the <--- curve of the tail. 22:44, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded that's an easy fix at least 15:44, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes appear a bit softer and the eye color a tad lighter. 01:17, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

On mine or the original? 02:39, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and smudge the pelt into the earpink 04:14, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Rushtooth (W) - CBA
Everything from the DF, including shading layers/opacity. 14:24 Sun Jun 9

the stripes look thing on the others, could you possibly thin them out some  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:59, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is over the page limit of 60 images. 15:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Never mind, some images were archived. 15:29, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading a bit. 20:10, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste trapped between the < front paw and the back paw

Can you smooth the leg shading for the front legs?  Ellie  life is an illusion 11:39, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Those areas of shading are affected by the pattern, there wasn't much I could do about them /: <span style="">12:03 Wed Jun 12

Super minor, but you've got waste in these areas 00:23, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Considering that the only comment in the past 2 days is waste, CBA? Waste is super minor and can be removed anytime.

Fernsong (Ki) ~ For Approval
oa claim that spooky gave to me. this was a hard pattern though :(

23:24, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading just a tiny bit on the top of the haunch? He is babey... 23:27, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

There should be paler streaks right above the eyes, paler parts sweeping up along the haunch lineart, and paler front paws. And the stripes appear more...scratchy? Not at smooth and uniform. I'm sorry that I'm bad with words. >.< 01:32, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

This looks a bit darker than his other images? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:43, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I colorpicked directly from his apprentice image. 11:31, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think the shading needs to go so far up the back

Reuploaded 15:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the transition between the paler parts and the base is more gradual and smoother, especially up the haunch. 01:20, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Erased some of it with an eraser at 20% opacity then blurred it. Idk if it worked though. 13:44, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Could you extend a small line of shading to the chin, just to help flatness?

Cora (W) - For Approval
Same source as Cloversplash. Comments? 01:05, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! I forgot her bitten ear, I'll add that in a moment. 01:06, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:20, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I know you're using clover's source but the shading could be smoothed a bit more.

12:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

honestly, it could be smoothed a lot. its too hard edged <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:27, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:51, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again tweaked things about the ears. 17:59, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the pupils look more like pupils and not a black line that goes through her eyes <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:42, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pupil change. 22:29, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could stand to be smoothed some more on the shoulder and haunch. 00:24, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:45, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

the nose color seems duller on the other images, and the others also show the ear to have a small bit deeper of a V shape than is here (looking to queen, is relatively facing frontwards)

Reuploaded *grabs a pair of scissors and trims away*  21:35, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnflower (K) - For Approval
We're back, baby. I changed a few things, including the shading and adding the small gap in the haunch that I forgot before. I'll upload her warrior tommorow. Comments? 02:04, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, especially around the cheek bone and smudge/blur the earpink into a pelt some so it's not such a perfect straight line 02:21, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

expand and smooth the haunch, please. 05:38, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth all the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded this is as far I'm willing to go with the face shading, as my source doesn't call for it to go all the way up the cheekbone. 22:37, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Where would the source be from, then? The seems very close to one of the two typical sources we see here - in all but the cheekbone. Unless other things give, what is here does call for it to connect, as Scarlet said.

The source is Baykit's. I'll reupload in a moment. 23:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Since your using Baykit's source, the facial shading corves all the way down so you would need to do as Scarlet said. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:13, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:00, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink a little more into the pelt? It still looks like a straight line,

Also, as an addition, can you connect the jaw shading to the chest? With this source, that should all be shadow.

Reuploaded  23:55, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Considerong you haunch shading isn't expanded much can you either expamd that or recede the tail shadinf <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:52, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded fixing the shading. This looks better. 23:46, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the forepaws and tailtip. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:56, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

fill in shading at the base of the arm, where it appears to be leaking from the lineart

Reuploaded  21:38, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the underside of the tail and haunch, the transition's still pretty blunt 04:17, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smudge my shading. I hope this looks better. 16:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

So I was discussing this with a few other people and wanted to bring something up. I think the tint of the shading should be dulled. And yes, I fully realize we leave the tint up to the artist most times, but not in cases where it interferes with set matchability. This looks nice on it's own, but I've put it with the others in the set, and it clashes and makes the images appear incongruent. It can obviously still retain some form of tint, but something not quite as prominent, in my opinion, so that the set meshes well.

Reuploaded No, I understand. 23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Cool great. I believe the shading could stand to be lightened some, and it's leaking away from the lineart at the bottom of where the arm hits the tail; both in that elbow crease and where it meets the tail tip. The shading at the side of the cheek, given this source, similar to how you've got it on Blackstar/Bluebellkit

Bramblestar (W) - For Approval
Another broad-shouldered dark brown tabby tom in the books. But he's the nice one :) Hopefully I gave Icy's Bramblestar some justice. 02:05, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a touch more and define the light on the tail 03:43, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Dsfine the shading on the paler parts I cant see it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:47, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

is the pale area -> actually part of the chest? on other images it seems to be the leg.

I meant that to be a part of the chest, but I see what you're talking about now... should I change it? 15:34, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Personally I would, most images so far have been treating that as a front leg

Can you fill in the space between the legs?

Additionally, for reference, doing something similar to Apple Blossom, Star Flower, or Quick Water for the pale chest. 20:19, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

The hind paw furthest from us isn't filled in, and I'm having trouble seeing the shading in general. 23:07, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:03, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly remove the pale from the > shoulder. That doesn't look like thats a piece kf the chest. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:55, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading, and desaturate the tint of it a little? It's giving off a cool effect, but I can't see it very well for such a dark cat, and the tint is throwing the colors off compared next to the set

Smudge the pelt into the earpink 04:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Birchbark (K) - For Approval


05:23, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, also this really good omg <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:48, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Also thicken the shading behind and the elbow into the crease at the belly 21:22, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Same as above^^

Reuploaded i hate shading with a passion

02:48, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the belly shading just a bit to match the transition the other bits have. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded i tried

02:29, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth just a tad more <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Tbh it looks fine.

13:07, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

The shading to the stomach and arm are more rough than the other areas. I don't think it would hurt to smooth just so it would match? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:32, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

i think it could be smoothed out 15:14, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded i tried

01:14, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading behind the foreleg and belly some more 04:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

05:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

It's still pretty sharp in the areas Scarlet mentioned

Appledusk (W) ~ For Approval
These new blanks are awesome!<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:02, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reupload Of course I only notice my shading issues the moment I upload.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:14, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

With your source, there should be less shading on the tail, could you lessen that some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:37, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

I had this issue with the other images... but I really think his base looks extremely greenish in tint. I think we should perhaps tweak his images to match the color of his official website icon.

Define the shading inside the ears and on the face 04:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reupload I'm not quite sure where exactly on the tail should I remove shading. Is the new edits what you mean Ellie? Also thanks Snowed for providing the image for me!<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:50, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Emberfoot (W) - For Approval
Will mess around with shading later, I wanted to get this up before I went to bed. On an unrelated note, if anyone has one of Dapplenose's files could you please send it to me (mello.roxas13@gmail.com)? 01:07, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shoulder shading a bit, and maybe expand it on both front legs? 16:47, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:26, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the tail (moreso as it goes to the tail tip, where it fades out now) and also to the base of the chest - looks a touch flat currently

Reuploaded. 19:15, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps expand and define the facial shading, including the ears? 01:23, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define/exaggerate the variation of color in the eyes, right now it looks like all one shade 04:20, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:55, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more.

can you define the eye depth? <span style="">02:15 Wed Jun 12

Dsfine the light source in the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened the shading depth  21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg

Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat?

Reuploaded  16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.

Reuploaded  23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (W) ~ CBA
kinda funny how the warrior blank looks like the early settler blank sitting down <span style="">22:51 Wed Jun 12

maybe define the shading on the tail and expand the haunch shading a little bit 07:41, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">20:10 Thu Jun 13

I've red-lined some waste for you 22:40, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">19:34 Fri Jun 14

CBA?

Ebonyclaw (W) ~ CBA
fixing eyes later.

03:42, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Should she have the moss around her collar? 03:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I just followed the old warrior so i dunno

03:50, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think we suggested that there would be moss on the warrior instead of the kittypet?

Also thin the collar a bit, it looks a bit big for a cat's collar 05:16, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think we are doing those not in A-D unless you're the OA of the image, which you don't appear to be unless I'm missing something?

-Es are listed.

09:06, June 13, 2019 (UTC) Reups yeehaw

13:18, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be shorthaired, to match her kittypet? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Warrior came first so no Malina457 (talk) 19:28, June 13, 2019 (UTC)malina

Redone kittypet was posted before the redone warrior, meaning this needs to be short-furred to match it.

I honestly think this should be long-furred to match the original set. I get that it was before we implemented the rule to match the original design, but Ebonyclaw also had a warrior image at the time that was long-furred. The kittypet must've been a mistake that we missed because the warrior images were removed. 04:10, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Since this's been uploaded as long-furred - CBA?

Lightning Stripe (Ki) - CBA
you aren't going to see her white part on her with the blanks at this view.

can u define the shading around the neck and front leg area 21:00, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

the shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart a little bit on the bottom side (our view) of the haunch

Re-uploaded.

CBA?

Applefur (TNP) (W)- CBA
05:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the mottles a little bit 07:40, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

reup upped the saturation and decreased the light 09:25, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the leg shading some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:38, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

REUP fixed other things that were bothering me 15:28, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

there's waste around the left whiskers as well as the far side of the image <span style="">22:18 Thu Jun 13

reup 02:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Considering waste was the only comment for the last 2 days.. CBA?

I do still see waste, actually. It’s on the far side of the image

Runningstorm (K) - CBA
i have a spiritual connection with this set <span style="">20:21 Thu Jun 13

lol been there  Brighty <3   define the shading on the head/add some around the contours of the cheek and muzzle  20:50, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">15:46 Fri Jun 14

CBA?

Eagle Feather (K) - For Approval


22:04, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

saturate the earpink? <span style="">22:19 Thu Jun 13

Smooth the tummy/shoulder shading a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:26, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i tried

01:27, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the tail stripes just a touch more 04:22, June 15, 2019 (UTC)\

reuploaded 04:50, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The midsection shading that's alongside the haunch is leaking away from the lineart

Dapplenose (W) - CBA
-just... screams- 22:14, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

so cute!! can you smooth out the chest shading a lil bit?? <span style="">00:43 Fri Jun 14

Reuploaded. One day I want to find out why she retired so young. 19:15, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles should extend to the very bottom/base of the chest; they don't go too far up but the other images show they at least are at the bottom

Reuploaded. Had some mottles there already but I went and added some more to define it. 19:57, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Deerleap (W) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:38, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes should be tapered some. 16:56, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think that very thick stripe on the very end of the tail shouldn't be quite so wide, compared to the other images

Tabby tom ~ For Approval


Add a little bit of variation to the stripes so they're a little less uniform? Can you also smooth out the shading on > that ear and the chest? 01:09, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

reups thinned out some stripes but i did more or less have the intention of them being uniform

maybe define the shading a bit, mainly on the haunch and lower legs as well as the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:38, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

reups

The stripes still seem very rigid. Perhaps try to curve them to fit the contour of the body? 01:28, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Ki) ~ CBA
00:54, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the stripes are a bit more...pronounced and visible on the other images? If that makes any sense. 01:30, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I darkened them a bit. Does this look better? 16:07, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Gorsestar (L) ~ CBA
02:19, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

isnt this an OA claim, especially considering raelic reserved it? 02:25, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Breezey's reservation disappeared last week. But I think this is still hers. This was declined a few months ago for the same reason. 02:30, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

The table was more than likely just swept up by a lead because I do remember it sitting there for several weeks, and ones over one week old can be removed. As for the OA claim itself, which runs separate from the reservation, that would apply in most cases. I do believe we're discussing what happens to those claims of users who become very inactive and don't do their stuff (after all, a wiki will not wait forever) on the talk, but it hasn't technically concluded yet.

I think it's fine if Vec keeps this. Breezey has had ample enough time to post Gorsestar (no offense, I realize Breezey is a person with a busy life outside the wiki), and we have more work that needs to be done. The train has to keep on rolling, and we can't wait forever.

Could you define the shading on the tail some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:59, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

the eyes are a bit cross-eyed <span style="">22:17 Fri Jun 14

Reups 00:13, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Fixed a few things 02:09, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Do you want the file? 08:54, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

I think I'm okay, but thanks! 17:15, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Crowfeather (W) ~ CBA


The hind paw furthest from us should be filled in. This is gorgeous! ^^ 16:54, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you!

CBA? 14:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dappletuft (K) ~ CBA
babey (OA claim given to me by Spooky)

04:14, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:36, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

reups tried.

04:54, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. W 3) - CBA
might fiddle with the darkness of the patches later. They looked better in PSE 05:31, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

the eyes seem a bit off, could you straighten the < one <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:36, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste at the very <--- end of the curve of the tail. 01:31, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:08, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:27, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dew Nose (W) ~ CBA


There's waste above the hind paw, and a triangle piece on <--- side of the tail. 16:53, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded killed waste

CBA? 14:29, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dust Muzzle (W) - For Approval
This was really hard to match :/  14:18, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-furred to match his other images? 16:24, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

I believe so yes, could you lighten the back shading some and maybe add a bit of depth, I can't tell if its the pattern but that area seems a bit flat to me <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:35, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I'm a dummy. Of course, they're longhaired lol. I also added some depth to the shading. 16:44, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

This is so gorgeous, man! Could you possibly lighten the shading on the pale muzzle area? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:20, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

I think the white-iish/off white lighter pale color should cover a little more of the haunch than it does; on the ES the shading hides it but it does go a bit further than here

Sweetpaw (K) - For Approval
sweetheart <span style="">16:11 Fri Jun 14

Can you define the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:34, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">00:28 Sat Jun 15

Can you make the black mark on the ---> side of her face (just below the ear) bigger/thicker? 01:32, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Benny (Ki) ~ CBA
Commmets? 16:51, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the haunch shading a bit?

Reuploaded. 19:33, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Brackenfur (Ki) ~ For Approval
struggled to find the pattern :(

17:22, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Isnt this against the 60 image limit? <span style="">17:25, 6/14/2019

crap i forgot

17:27, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

There's a few about to be CBA'ed in a few minutes, so this is honestly fine to keep up for now. Just double check next time. 17:34, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Also, as we just mentioned maybe yesterday or the day before, bringing up the page limit and whatnot is a lead task.

Sorry ive been off the radar for like a month so i have absolutely no idea whats going on. My bad :( <span style="">00:12, 6/15/2019

could you smooth out the shading?

Sandstorm (Alt W 4) ~ For Approval
<span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:55, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Think there's some leaking shading on the hind paw furthest from us, and on top of the <--- front paw. 01:35, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

I'll take a look in a bit but that lightness on the hind paw is a bit of light. As the cat is sitting down so a small amount of light would most likely make it onto there however I can cover it all in shading if need be but I do have light on that area with the other cats I've used this source with. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

If you've used this source before and the light on the hind paw was there, then it's fine. It just seemed like leaking at a quick glance lol. 17:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, I totally get it. It's the same source as Shellfur, Cedarstar, and Blackstar. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The base, when compared, is darker than the rest of the alt set

Scourge (K) - For Approval
thank you Jayce for the Oa claim!

If he has the tooth, then I believe he shouldn't have the bell, since he lost the bell before he got the tooth. 22:35, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure honestly, I was just going by what the old kit had - and it had both

I think it would be fine since the kit appearance is in his manga so it would match that iirc? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:40, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

But he never had the tooth and the bell at the same time in the manga. 15:50, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

bluestar is right, and with the bell being how it was in the manga, it wouldn't be visible in this position if he had both anyway. 18:56, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

I know the space is very small, but the eye color overall seems just a touch lighter? If it's my eyes playing tricks, do let me know

Acorn Fur (K) - CBA
i tried

reuploaded changed some things

CBA?

Fringewhisker (K) ~ For Approval
Might need to edit a few things. 23:49, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you sharpen and slightly shrink that larger white patch on the haunch that's perpendicular to the haunch? Just eyeing the app's placements etc.

Reups 00:28, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Gullswoop (K) ~ For Approval
NOW this was a very experimental shading/lightsource when I made this forever ago. 23:49, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the facial and forepaw shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:44, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reups what is this source even 01:13, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like you can add some more shading to the back of the ear on our right <span style="">15:15 Sat Jun 15

I believe there wouldn't be any because of the light source? The light is going <--- so the back of the ears would be in the light. 17:16, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Emberkit (CJ) (Ki) ~ For Approval
01:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading a little bit?

Re-uploaded. 16:04, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sol (Alt KP) - For Approval
woo.

can you define the body and hind leg shading some?? <span style="">03:41 Sat Jun 15

Smudge the white a bit more? 16:09, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The white looks fine imo, it matches his manga appearances <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:11, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Sol (Alt L) ~ For approval
02:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) - For Approval
04:40, June 15, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

This'll need a dorsal stripe; the old warrior is the master pattern.

Define the shading on the shoulder an haunch some; it looks a lot thicker and darker on the head 17:17, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 00:58, June 16, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Cloudpelt (k) ~ for approval
my hands are cramping

04:55, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the belly shading some? <span style="">16:02 Sat Jun 15

SkyClan's Destiny gray she-cat (W) ~ For Evaluation
My first canon charart. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 07:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading please? also there was a thumb on your image so i removed it :)

10:32, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

whoops sorry for the double comment. the eyelashes should be removed as they are not in use to define gender anymore

10:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Soften up the texture a bit to match her kittypet. Good work! 13:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 13:46, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumb the image by going into source mode and removing the |left. Make the pupils less of a square, add eyeshine, and define the shading on the hind feet. 14:11, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Changed the heading from approval to evaluation since you're still a kit^^ Smooth the shading on the legs and flank, and there appears to be shading leaking from the chest and leg farthest from us, then add some to the ears. Nice job on this! 14:31, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes look like there's still lashes, that part shouldn't be there iirc <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:10, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Flykit (TR) (K) - For Approval
17:16, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading and recede the shoulder back just a tiny bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:09, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Black Ear (Ki) ~ For approval
18:25, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Splashfoot (W) - For Approval
This was my very first image, so I decided to keep the colors and general look. 19:52, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good, could you define the shading just a tiny bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:39, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Drizzle (W) ~ For Approval
matched the ES since that came first

Blossom (W) - For Approval
01:23, June 16, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel