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Tunneler blank - For Approval
22:16, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

Is there any chance you could size these down? 22:17, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what the line across their flank is supposed to be? Also can you make the ear facing us a little smaller? 23:03, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

Agreed with Hawk's statements. I think you should smooth the lineart a bit and there are extra lines that sorta don't make sense to me.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:22, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:29, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

The heads need to be moved back as they look a little unnatural right now.

Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:13, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i only edited the short hairs neck, i think the long hair is fine but if anyone disagrees, let me know. 03:20, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

These are stunning oh gosh. The necks are fine to me, but can you define the front paw thats being held up? The toes look a little off since you've fit 3 toes in when in perspective, only two should be showing if that makes sense.

Wow these are looking incredible so far, Patch! It seems as though the tail on the short-hair isn't even throughout. The tail tip seems thicker than the rest of the tail. 15:09, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:57, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

I think make the shorthair tail a bit thinner? 19:13, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. my hand is way too shaky. 04:48, December 2, 2018 (UTC)

Could you thicken the lineart on the paws some? 05:12, December 2, 2018 (UTC)

The front paws facing away from us don't match between the longhair and shorthair.

Re-uploaded. 15:44, December 2, 2018 (UTC)

This Might just be me, but on the longhaired, the back leg farthest from us, it looks sort of... off. Like there is a bump on it, that makes it look... broken? Can you just straighten it a little bit? ~We Mewish You A Meowry Catristmas =^.,.^= 20:56, December 2, 2018 (UTC)

Thats the bone of the leg I'm pretty sure. Since tunnelers are mostly WindClan cats, I imagine it was put there to define their bony structure. I think it's okay, though the indent of the leg could be smoothed over a bit.

Re-uploaded. 21:19, December 2, 2018 (UTC)

I think the tails could be shortened a tad, they seem extra long (well mainly the shorthair does). Minkclaw Winter is coming. 00:05, December 3, 2018 (UTC)

They look fine to me. Even in the books it is acknowledged that tunnelers have long tails to help them with cave ins. 00:47, December 3, 2018 (UTC)

Could you shorten the muzzle by the smallest amount? 12:22, December 3, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:41, December 3, 2018 (UTC)

Fringepaw (Lo) - For Approval
I don't... know how I feel about this. All colors are from the other image I did. Her description got swapped, so this is the main one now. ​​

Can you define the shading on the white? Primarily the face, haunch and shoulder. —

It's a bit hard to tell with the shading you got here, but if not, there should be some white on the chest. I also think the front paw furthest from us should be predominantly white, and there should be white above the paw on the front limb closest to us. And, idk, try fiddling around with more white patches and splatters? Maybe that'll make it match better. 03:59, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Echo, where you're asking me to define the shading on the white (the haunch and shoulder specifically), there isn't going to be any due to the source I'm using (I use this one on almost all of my loner images), but I can try on the face. I'll reupload in a little bit. The fact I forgot how I made the apprentice image isn't helping any. ​

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Slightly less crappy. ​

That eye makes her look surprised, lol. I still can't see the facial shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:30, December 5, 2018 (UTC)