Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Morningcloud (W) ~ Declined
I seem to attract solid gray chararts. This definitely isn't my best. Comments? OA was Echomist. Just a shading tweak. 20:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

What needed to be done, and who was the OA? Also, define the ear pink. 21:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:51, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 02:04, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. I'll have it reuploaded by tomorrow. I was in Florida over the weekend. 22:21, March 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the haunch highlight. 23:55, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 07:32, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. 22:53, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger. 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Not to be very picky, and this might just be me, but the shading is a little bit to dark overall. Could you just lighten it up? Also blur the tail shading too. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  20:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think this might be as ginger as it will get.. x3 But eh. 03:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight/lighter part/thing a bit bigger? 8D Sky Gatlocke 11:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Don't hate me, but she still looks like a light-brown cat 00:18, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmkay, I'll try my best, I'll upload soon x3 *doesn't hate you* 02:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe have the colors a bit closer to Brightheart or Flowerstar? don't hurt me! *hides*  00:12, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Scarlet, it's fine. XD I'm really sorry, I don't know what the problem is but whenever I try to make it more ginger, it looks so unnatural... Did my best, though. :3 Oh, and Sky, where? 05:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky Molto bene  14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over C:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 21:26, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I attempted to match it to the warrior image's pattern. Don't look at it, it's ugly D:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 22:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <3 Lovely Elo 22:03 Sun Mar 4

Blur it, too. 22:32, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match all that well. It seems like the alt apprentice's stripes were based off the normal warrior image, so using that as a ref on what it'd look like from this angle might help. 15:27, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I tried to match the warrior; I didn't suceed. Withdrawing because I don't want to get frustrated Dx  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 20:59, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 00:54, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match the apprentice and warrior images. OA was Echomist. I did the apprentice one, so I already know the style and the opacity for all the layers and all that, so this wasn't too hard. 00:46, 04, 03, 2012

Lighten the shading a tad. 19:07, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:39, 05, 03, 2012

Make the stripes darker (those need to be tweaked on the apprentice too....). They should be almost black to match the warrior. 15:25, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 05:50, 08, 03, 2012

Tallpoppy (W) ~ Redone
W00t join.me 8D OAs were Bramble and Flamingomom3 I think. Comments? 06:34 Sun Mar 4

kay so, let's get this straight. words cannot describe how amazing this is. just, fyi. k? all I see is that you need to define the earpink, then we need to have my funeral. 07:38, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think you could lighten up the tail shading a tad, but seriously, bloody perfect Sky Gatlocke 11:11, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8DDD Thank you so much 15:49 Sun Mar 4

My my my, O.o wow...a-m-a-z-i-n-g. All I can say is define the tail stripes a tad...20:54, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Cinder <33 21:26 Sun Mar 4

* Drops jaw in horror and amazment* Really, your chararts are so good, they're scaring me. I have no idea how you do it... Maybe slightly blur the earpink at the edges, other than that, perfect. 05:33, 05, 03, 2012

Re-uploaded 8D Thank you DJ <3 05:49 Mon Mar 5

Oh, can ya blur the neck shading some? (Dude, knives everywhere) Sky Gatlocke  06:45, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded You better listen to me now >:} 14:57 Tue Mar 6

Can choo blur the heck shading just a leetle bit more? Other then that, I honestly see nothing wrong. (Scary knives~) 03:55, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded W00t knives! This is as blurred as it will go x.x 05:39 Thu Mar 8

Brightsky (Q) ~ Redone
She was fun to make... ginger cats rock. 8D 03:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I thought the file name said queer xD Blur the shading. Sky Gatlocke 03:30, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little? I still say this is Brightheart is her past life <3 03:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

And define the eye colour. 17:57, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to add a few more stripes on the face? Sky Molto bene 11:35, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and legs, define the shading on her tail, and blur the patch on her belly as well. <3.  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Finchstar (L) - Redone
Too lazy to list why it was redone. XD Check the tweak nominations page. OA was Nightfall101. Changes aren't showing. I had two versions of these, so if you guys want to see the other, I can upload it and you can just compare the archives. Comments? 00:11, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Show us the other version. 00:41, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Well reuploaded so you could see it, but you can't actually see it yet.... XD *slaps wiki lag* Mayb I'll put up the two archives side by side 00:57, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

There. The one on the left is the one people on chat seem to like more, but I can't decide. 00:58, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

I like the one on the left <33333333 00:59 Tue Mar 6

The left one~ 02:05, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Left one it is. o3o Now, actual comments for improvement? XD 02:54, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the whites parts looks kinda reddish-brown. Maybe make a separate layer of shading for the paws and chest and shade with black/gray? Just my opinion. Maybe smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit? 03:40, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Q) - Tweak
OAs were me and Sandstar12. Reason being unrealistic stripes. To be honest, I raged when I tried to copy my own stripes on her tail. So sorry if some look out of place because I kind of gave up XD 05:09, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur where the 'highlights' meet the shading on the belly. 8D Lovely~ 20:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on her haunch a bit. This is pretty... ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  00:02, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (W) - Redone
Because stripes. OA was Dawnfeather with a redo by me and a tweak by Leafstorm. Everything is the exact same as his deputy except the tail. 01:55, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. C: Sky Molto bene  11:34, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:56, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (SC) - Redone
Because stripes. OA was was Scarlet and me. 08:04 Wed Mar 7

Define the earpink a tad. Sky Molto bene  11:31, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (W) ~ Redone
OA was Blackclaw09 and it needed to be redone because the shading was blotchy and highlights needed to be brightened. Also, I see the brown on her leg, I'll fix it in the next Upload. 23:01, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

he earpink is much to big, so make is smaller. Darken the shading, and blur where the white meet the brown just on the neck above the chin. Looks great! 23:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail, and the white on the back paw. There is also some brown mixed in with the white on the front paw (the one closest to us), and can you lighten the shading on the legs just a tad? 01:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

What's up with that ear pink, Rowan? Did you try it like the leader images? Define the shading, darken it, and define the highlight (or whatever it is) on the haunch, 'cause it looks like it's all shading. 04:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks neat to me. :P Can you blur that top part of the white? And (if possible, otherwise disregard this) make the white curve with the body a bit? Sky Molto bene 11:35, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and make the earpink less gray and more pink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:02, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried to make the earpink like the queen on my past one. 22:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (W) - Tweaked
I've been telling myself to tweak more chararts. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Night Shine. Shading had to be darker. 00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading. 00:53, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:56, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her shoulder. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  12:14, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define "highlight" on the shoulder. 22:51, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Q) - Tweaked
OA was Sandy with a tweak by Night Shine. Shading needed to be darker and defined. 00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and tail. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 13:55, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Whitefang (W) - Tweaked
OA is me, and I re-did the shading...and that's all I'm doing. 00:28, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur da shading. 00:31, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww. I liked the darker shading. XD 00:37, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it then o3o. Lots. >:C 00:38, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. 00:46, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 00:50, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:57, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur he shading on the muzzle and chest/neck  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 01:57, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 22:47, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

No. I'm quite partial to the darker shading. 22:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Redone
I liked the elder better. OA was me, technically, and it needed to match the loner. 01:41, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch just a tad? ^^ 01:59, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and it looks like there's a white/gray spot on the haunch. 22:46, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ear pink is fine. If I blur it, it'll be almost non-existent. I fixed the haunch though - it was just a highlight I'd forgotten to lower the opacity on. Re-uploaded. 22:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)