Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=Tweaked= Take it to the tweak page

=Images Pending Approval= Please use this section to put images up for approval only.

Bluebellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I hate the shading. I couldn't get it to look right.

Hm..have you looked at the shading placement on the tutorial page? I have it pulled up and the shading for that is actually on the right side of the kitten image having the light source come from the left. Maybe try using that as an example. For an admin, this needs renamed to File:Bluebellkit.kit.png — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 03:17, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

that's only a general guide. there's multiple usable sources, and this source is fine. 06:19, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the neck shading and define the light on the tail

It's a little hard to tell since the image is so small, but I think I spy a bit of waste next to that right front paw. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:23, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded *Face palm* Shading still looks weird.

No, it doesn't. Just smooth it out a little bit near the edges of it and you'll be just fine. Also, be sure to sign with four ~'s, as you haven't been leaving a timestamp with your messages. You have a signature, but I can't tell what time you left said message, and that wouldn't be good for comments, CBAing, reuploading, ect.

reuploaded I think it looks better. 02:36, September 20, 2016

Shading looks nice, but some is leaking outside of the lineart(above the tail and some on the head). Songfire (talk) 15:14, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded I think this looks good.

Define the light on the legs? 15:25, 9/21/2016

The file is named incorrectly -- should be named File:Bluebellkit.kit.png with two 'l' 's in Bluebell.

blur(?) the body shading some more. 22:03, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 49:32, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more. 03:33, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:27, September 22, 2016

There's some waste around the image mostly on <== that side. 21:40, 9/24/2016

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 00:34, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded Thats about as much as I can smudge it. 33:36, September 27 2016 (UTC)

Lighten it and define the light on the paws. 17:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded21:01:13 30 September 2016 UTC

Smooth out the shading a bit more and define the light on the tail. 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste surrounding the <- paw. Songfire (talk) 21:49, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 18:45:20 5 Oct 2016 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front legs. 00:19 Fri Oct 2016

Define the shading on the tail, and maybe the belly shading should go up a bit along the side of the front leg, if that makes sense? Also, there is waste near the right front paw, I think. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:38, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading behind the front legs 17:31, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:05:25 8 Oct 2016 (UTC)

There's waste around <- half of the cat. 23:38, 10/08/2016

The shading is leaking on the tail, and also, there seems to be a random line of shading spanning over the legs? With your light source, the belly underneath would be shaded, or the line would be erased.

reuploaded It is impossible for there to be anymore waste. 18:3:18 9 Oct 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading on the back paw. Also, forgive, but there is still a tiny bit of waste by the front right paw (our right). At least I think so. 20:03, 10/09/2016

reuploaded

Silvermask (D) - For Approval
god bless — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:37, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, and have the light be more rounded on the belly, the shape looks a bit off, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:25, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, I probably don't know about critizing my own work, but is the little "mask" alright? — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:44, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

The mask seems a little sharp up at the top, so maybe smooth it just up there in the left side :)

Re-Upps, had to do two uploads forgot to remove the waste the first time — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:08, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading; it cuts off abruptly.

Re-Upps, I redid the stomach shading so hopefully it looks better. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:08, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light source; half the shading suggests the light's coming from the front and the other half suggests that it's coming from the back/somewhere behind the haunch 07:11, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

I'm not seeing how it suggests that, the way I did it, it's coming from the front. Could I get some more comments on that possibly? I followed the shading placement, some suggestions from there trying new shading and all. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:46, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

I personally don't think it looks out of place at all. I also don't see how you think the light source is coming from behind the haunch, Scarlet? 18:45, 9/23/2016

I used this light source on all of my deputies, which were approved. That's what I based the shading placement example for this blank on. The only reason this looks different is that I smudge my shading to look textured. Although, the shading could be defined on the legs and face some so that it is more obvious that the light is coming from the front. Very nice (: 23:04 Fri Sep 23

The tail shading looks slightly blotchy, and also the shading seems to cut off a bit oddly here in a line

Re-Upps, thanks! — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:28, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading on the underbelly right by the front leg's elbow, or whatever you call it xD 14:38, 9/27/2016

Re-Upps — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 17:03, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

The stomach shading is leaking away from the lineart, and the shading on all four legs could be defined. I'd also suggest defining the facial shading as well.

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw 16:14, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the underbelly shading and add a bit more behind the leg where the underbelly meets the chest. <span style="">16:18, 9/28/2016

There's also waste around the under carriage of the image. <span style="">16:20, 9/28/2016

Could you smooth the shading on the outstretched paw?

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   19:26, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's still waste. Smooth out the underbelly shading more, and add more behind the elbow. <span style="">19:32, 9/28/2016

Re-Upps, I've smoothed the stomach as much as I can —  Minkclaw   19:46, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the farthest from us back leg by the joint, and I still think it could use a little more shading behind that elbow by the underbelly area. And possibly define the shading on the legs a little more? <span style="">23:03, 9/28/2016

Can you define the shading on the tail? 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, the front leg closest to us can't be darkened anymore as I have it at 100% now. —  Minkclaw   16:06, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, you can. Use another layer with more shading and do it that way. Also smooth out the stomach shading a lot; that area is still really blocky.

Re-Upps darkened front leg closest, hopefully that's dark enough. —  Minkclaw   16:11, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

fixed stomach shading as well, seemed too hard edged to me —  Minkclaw   16:14, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Add more shading behind the elbow. <span style="">16:20, 10/05/2016

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   16:37, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Re-added texture...—  Minkclaw   16:39, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. 18:39:15, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste under the image still by the legs. <span style="">19:25, 10/05/2016

Re-Upps, I'd rather not lighten as I was told repeatedly to darken it..I think its fine. —  Minkclaw   19:39, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading? <span style="">19:44, 10/05/2016

can I get a second on that? As its already pretty light —  Minkclaw   14:05, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be shading - I think it just needs to be defined, so we can see a bit more clearly what is light and what is shadow, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:48, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, darkened tail —  Minkclaw   16:06, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on -> half of the image, and smooth out all of it, especially the stomach shading. It's too hard-edged and dark.

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   14:49, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Hi, sorry if you guys think this is bad... this is my first time making a charart for a character. My shading isn't so great, but I do like the eyes on Poolcloud. Please comment if you like or think I need improvement.

<font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:16, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

Try not to align your images^^ And also this

should technically be '~For Evaluation' since you are a kit in the Project, but eh. Perhaps try to match the placement of the white and gray better on the --> side of the cat and on the tail

Oh oops. <font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:43, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

How do I become an apprentice

<font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:44, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

Switched the heading for you (although it'll probably be switched back shortly knowing my bad timing). And to become an apprentice, basically, a lead just has to promote you when they feel your image is (according to guidelines) "50%" complete, and it seems that you know what you're doing. Doesn't take long, in most cases.^^

I made some changes- the new one is below.

You need to keep uploading under File:Poolcloud.star.png, not make a new file every time. It's a lot for us to clean up of people don't reupload under the same file. It also needs to be at the top of your section, not at the bottom.

There's waste in the space between the body and the tail. 02:12, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

darken the shading quite a bit please. I cant tell its there —  Minkclaw   16:17, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste in between the front legs. <span style="">00:25, 10/06/2016

It looks like there's a gray patch on her cheek that shouldn't be there - or is that shading? If it's shading, recede it a little bit, I think it stretches out too far on her face. Also, the ear pink looks lighter than on the other images. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:21, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't know how to upload it as Poolcloud.star.png every time. I tried it last time but it wouldn't let me upload my changes. <font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 22:00, October 9, 2016 (UTC)breezy1235

Voleclaw (star) ~ For Approval
On a scale from bad to bad, how bad is it? 22:32, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define tail shading--  23:14, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking around the image, and throughout it in general. Try looking at the category for approved StarClan images for an idea as to how the shading should look next to the lineart.

Could you expand the earpink? Songfire (talk) 04:16, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink and make the shading colour look more similar. Are you using a darker gray as a shading tint? I'm not trying to clamp onto your creativity, but black or dark blue works better as a shading colour. Also, I don't know if I should be commenting like I am on the highlights because I don't know much about the highlights but it looks odd. And also everything above. --

Theres nothing wrong with the shading color tbh. But could you blend the highlights and shading a lil more, please?  <span style="">18:46 Wed Oct 5 

I just noticed a bit of waste by the eye. --

Expand the earpink so it touches the lineart, and the shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart in a lot of places, try and get it back against the lineart? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:25, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't have access my computer with the charart for a while >.< 21:10, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading, and maybe get rid of the patch of gray on her rear end. 20:17, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

There's some gray on its right eye (our left) - Jose1106 (talk) 23:15, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the lateness >.< 00:03, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Downkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
00:07, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Nice, but I'm pretty sure this has to be short-furred since she was a WindClan cat and (unless specified) we're supposed to make them short-furred

Downkit is described as having fluffy fur. Birdflight has fluffy fur, and she's longhaired. Fuzz is longhaired and has fluffy fur. Daisy has fluffy fur, she's longhaired, so does Echosong, Mousewhisker, Badgerfang, Clover, Cloudtail and Pixie. Anyways expand the earpink. --

Imo, the earpink is fine - it doesn't need to fill in the whole ear. But can you blur the chest shading just a tad? <span style="">04:27 Thu Oct 2016

All WindClan cats are to be short fur, and all RiverClan cats are to have long fur, unless otherwise stated within the series, or from the authors themselves.

Before I do any more work on this, I just want to clarify- is this character to be modeled as a shorthair? I used the longhaired model because of the mention of her fluffy, feathery fur, but would that not change anything? Thanks to all for your input. 06:23, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

No, keep her longhaired. If she is mentioned to have fluffy fur, then keep it fluffy. <span style="">14:35, 10/06/2016

I agree with longhaired, especially because she's named for the fluffy fur. 15:39, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Yep. Keep her fluffy. But as I said, expand the earpink next time you reupload. --

Reuploaded. Fluffy it is! But please avoid repeating comments, and I agree that the earpink is fine, it covers almost all of the ear. 22:42, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading? <span style="">00:15 Fri Oct 2016

Down feathers are soft feathers on a newborn/premature owlet/other birds. They are not long feathers. In fact, they're soft and kinda short, since the birds aren't all that big as babies.

Reuploaded. May as well- defined tail shading. Again, before I do more work on this... not longhaired, or longhaired? 23:04, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

i'd have to disagree purely because she's named for it. we've given longhairs to cats that've been called fluffy but not longfurred (mousewhisker, pixie, hazeltail, etc) but if ppl go with shorthaired from here I won't argue further. 23:08, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Given my extensive research on down feathers (which was more like 10 minutes or so), I've come to the conclusion that down feathers are in fact short and fluffy. So, it would have to become shorthaired. <span style="">23:15, 10/07/2016

Reuploaded. Fluff is gone- well, it's shorter. Fixed leaking some shading pixels too. 22:51, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

I don't know if I'm just struggling to see the earpink against black fur but the earpink seems to be leaking onto the forehead.

I think the fur should be darkened a lot more, and the hightlights seem to be a bit too intense, if those are highlights. <span style="">13:33 Sun Oct 9

Reuploaded. Darkened image, smoothed highlights, fixed earpink. 02:50, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

May I please have some comments on this? :) 23:54, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Sunfish (Star) ~ For Approval
could you rename this file into File:Sunfish.star.png beacuse I'm silly and forgot to change the name :/ 18:52, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Moved. Can you define the light on the face and smooth out the shading on her body? 15:55, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry, but I can't smooth the shading more 16:34, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Why not? I think you can smooth it out a little bit more.

Reuploaded 21:18, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Littlekit (YS) (Star) ~ For Approval
I only like your eyes. 15:19, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Do you want and/or need the file for the kit? I can send it to you later today if you shoot me your email address.

Yes please! I'll message you. 22:09, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reups only a little better. 15:52, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Meadowslip (Star) ~ For Approval
22:57, October 10, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the shading isn't spread out over the main body enough, could you spread that out some more. define tail shading —  Minkclaw   14:22, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload  19:13, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking behind the elbow^^

Reupload 22:32, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth on the head/neck/chest area? <span style="">15:11, 10/14/2016

Pricklekit (star) ~ For Approval
Why such a cruel name?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:34, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws and tail.

Reupload <font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  22:26, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) ~ For Approval
this shading killed me.. —  Minkclaw   14:40, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little, smooth it out on the thigh/butt, and define the depth on the tail + far front paw, please.  <span style="">19:00 Tue Oct 11 

Birdsong (Star) ~ For Approval
tried to take colors from the other image, but they're probably off by a little bit

Make sure the white ring on <= eye follows the white on the elder. Also, I'm pretty sure I have the file if you need it. <span style="">21:50, 10/11/2016

Reuploaded

Comments?

Skyheart (Star) ~ For Approval
I tried. <span style="">15:20, 10/12/2016

could you lighten the tail stripes some more, the stripes seem a tad darker than the warrior? —  Minkclaw   19:35, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Forgot a layer. <span style="">19:45, 10/12/2016

Comments? <span style="">22:21, 10/15/2016

Morningkit (Star) ~ For Approval
15:53, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you lighten her a bit? I mean, she is called very light gray-brown. 16:27, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

her eyes look a little more green than actual yellow could you make them more yellow? —  Minkclaw   19:32, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

The eyes are fine; they look yellow to me, and since a specific shade of yellow wasn't mentioned, it can be any shade of yellow.

reuploaded the shading does make her look a bit darker than she is, because I have to keep that visible at the same time and it's already an annoying colour to shade. 20:11, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste above her back. - Jose1106 (talk) 23:08, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 06:49, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Larksplash (Star) ~ For Approval
 <span style="">22:17 Wed Oct 12 

Smooth out the shading on the white?

Unfortunately (for me at least) the shading color you got going on here is throwing off the image a lot from the other two. I think it either needs to become black or maybe a darker shade of purple or blue. <span style="">03:30, 10/13/2016

Reups thats as dark as I'm making it  <span style="">11:57 Thu Oct 13 

define earpink —  Minkclaw   14:02, October 13, 2016 (UTC)

Splashkit (Star) - For Approval
04:06, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Nightwing (A) ~ For Approval
All colors from StarClan image. Comments? 21:25, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Carpkit (Star) - For Approval
Precious little one. ;.;