Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 280

Kitescratch (W) - Approved
had a break but i'm back now for the time being. activity will continue to be spotty because of school  W i n d s o n g   (talk)   13:45, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, this looks great, but I thought I reserved this before? 14:52, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Windsong did reserve this before you, Les. I saw hers pop up in the activity feed before yours. -- 14:54, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Nvm then! maybe remove some of the shading on the <-- foreleg? 14:56, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree. That would contradict the light source because all the legs need be in shadow. -- 14:58, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, you could have a little bit of light there and it could still make sense with the light source. Also the eyes should be a little more amber? On my current screen they look a little washed out.

Seconding Max with this one. There are quite a few images with sources identical, or at least similar, to this who also have shading on the legs. I personally think the image could benefit from it, because otherwise it looks like he has darker legs (kinda like Sandynose or Finleap).

reuploaded -- W i n d s o n g   (talk)   18:35, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:01, November 8, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for breaking this, but is it possible to lighten the shading? He's still looking like he's two different colors...

reuploaded -- W i n d s o n g   (talk)   13:47, November 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 18:15, November 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for breaking the CBA again, but, I still think the shading can be lightened a little more - its still appearing as though he has darker legs, and even his face is quite dark. If it helps, the apprentice and kit use #310000 as the shading colour, and are set on multiply @ 60% for the first shading layer, and 55% for additional depth.

reuploaded -- W i n d s o n g   (talk)   17:03, November 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:51, November 14, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 01:56, November 15, 2019 (UTC)

Whistlepaw (app) - Approved
i need to do some work on the haunch stripes, i'll reupload those in a bit. 01:45, November 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the lighter colors peeking between the stripes here? I plopped it next the kit and it just seems overall darker in comparison

Re-uploaded. I think the shading placement was the problem. 20:40, November 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:51, November 14, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 01:56, November 15, 2019 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (W) - Approved
Now I can go to bed. -- 06:33, November 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading? Moo (talk) 22:24, November 10, 2019 (UTC)

May I please ask for a second opinion? I see it fine. -- 00:36, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think perhaps the facial shading and maybe the ears; there would be shading there since it's a 3D object and not a flat surface. Also, I know that eye style is artist's choice, but I'm finding it hard to see the pupil in this image. Also, where's the eye color? The apprentice has a yellowish color, and I'm not seeing anything here other than gray. ​​​

I think wikia's being a butt, because i can see the eye color. 04:16, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'm gonna second Jayce here and say that the eye colour does look considerably more gray than the apprentice's colour - taking into consideration that Wikia does wash out colours at times (but I think, as it isn't washed out on the app, then it probably wouldn't be washed out here if its the same colour). (04:20, 11/11/2019) ​

Reuploaded Does anyone see the eye color and pupils now? -- 23:03, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

I can see both, but now she looks cross-eyed. o.o ​

Reuploaded owo -- 00:30, November 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:53, November 14, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 01:56, November 15, 2019 (UTC)

Lilyheart (K) - Approved
??? 23:51, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:54, November 14, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 01:56, November 15, 2019 (UTC)

Thistleheart (K) - Approved
I love her name <3 -- 00:45, November 13, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:55, November 14, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 01:56, November 15, 2019 (UTC)