Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Molepaw (OTS) ~ Silver nomination
I know,it needs improvements, but I am willing to nominate him for silver status. Comments? 04:13, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Expand NIght Whispers. 01:30 Thu Dec 8

In the Forgotten Warrior, can you possibly add in when Jayfeather goes into Molepaw's mind and sees the fox moment, and describe the moment? 04:49, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also add in a better main quote, and add some to the bottom? 04:50, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 00:10 Wed Dec 14

Yep, starting now. -- 01:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

In The Forgotten Warrior, it isn't explained why Molepaw gave in and let Firestar apprentice him to Rosepetal, it just says that it does. Could you add that in, please? 22:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I added that. I'll work on the quotes now. 00:17, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you get another quote in there please? 15:28 Mon Dec 26

Are you still working on this? If possible, the quote section should contain 3 quotes, like Sweetflower said. 22:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I found a quote. I'm not very good with quotes... O.e 19:38, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, nice work! I added a little bit more to the description. CBV? 00:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Jingo - Silver Nomination
History has been expanded big time, and I'll be adding quotes. Comments? 22:02, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Break up some paragraphs in the history. Apart from that and no quotes, this article is awesome! 00:44, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

(Just letting you know) I made it bronze. 02:53 Sun Dec 25

This is great! I know you're gonna be dealing with the quotes, but could you make the main quote show her personality more? 00:17, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I've been doing a bit of expanding as the ending was cut short due to a turn on my time table. Anyways, I'll be getting that done. =3 18:28, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! Just add more quotes if possible, and this can be CBVed. 22:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Done. =3 03:15, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 00:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Flower (Ro) ~ Silver Nomination
So sorry that I haven't been here.. I missed editing articles, (more than usual, at least) so I have decided to come back from the dead. I edited Flower just a tad, since there really wasn't anything to add. It is really similar to Warriors App paragraph, like as if the person just copied it right off of there. Should I fix it a bit, or should I just leave it as it is? 03:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Which Flower. Flower Sharpclaw's sister, or Flower the loner who was mentioned in Sunrise? 17:09 Tue Dec 27

Argh, though I had the right page... Dumb computer. >.< Flower as in Sharpclaws sister, sorry about that. :3 (I'll change the link)  01:57, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Any quotes? I'm not sure that Warriors App only characters get quotes. 01:44, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

You could probably use the same quote I used for Jessamy. 01:51, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Oblivion. I'll go add it. ^-^  20:37, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It's been added so, CBV? 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Olivenose ~ Silver Nomination
I like her name. :3 Comments? 17:17 Tue Dec 27

Quotes are on the way. 17:31 Tue Dec 27

Could you expand Battles of the Clans any more? 00:58, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded by two words, that's all I could. xD 18:05 Wed Dec 28

Quotes are done. 21:15 Wed Dec 28

CBV? 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Echomist ~ Silver Nomination
Quotes are on the way! Comments? 17:21 Tue Dec 27

Could you possibly make a new section for Into the Wild and add how she wasn't in the allegiances there? 01:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

She might have died before than though. If ya read the last sentence in her CP section, it says she might have died. :D 17:51 Wed Dec 28

Quotes are added. 21:13 Wed Dec 28

I added a quote as well. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 14:52, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Well, CBV? 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Jessamy - Silver Nomination
All right, I hope I can remember how to do this. I added a quote that isn't really a quote, but her history looks good to me. 02:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice so far. The first paragraph in her history section seems to describe Sharpclaw more than her. 17:16, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed, hopefully. 01:15, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still describes Sharpclaw more. I suggest perhaps just deleting the whole paragraph, unless you can find a way to emerge it into the other sections. 01:51, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Deleted. 01:53, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cinders - Silver Nomination
I liked her for some reason. I made her bronze status. Comments? 03:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I rewrote 98% of her history. Will work on the quotes tomorrow. 04:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, minor expanding, added references for all her family, and worked on the quotes. I'll shut up now. x3 19:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Furzepelt - Silver Nomination
I added quotes, which was pretty much all she needed. 01:55, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly detail The Sign of the Moon just a bit more? 20:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:01, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Mouthclaw - Silver Nomination
I expanded the history by 2 paragraphs, added references and a see also. Comments? 02:04, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Can you make the second paragraph flow a bit more? And can you explain what the Clan cats do after they learn what Mouthclaw did? (if that makes any sense xD)  03:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Like this? I added a whole new paragraph to the trouble that Sunpelt gets in, if that's what you mean. <span style="">23:41, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

I just realised I need to add quotes. They will be coming in a moment. <span style="">23:49, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

No, I think you should delete that paragraph, in my opinion. I just realized that I asked you to write more about Sunpelt that Mouthclaw, my bad... >.<  19:12, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thats okay xD I expanded the last paragraph more and added quotes. I'm not sure about the quotes though, as she's only mentioned in, 2 pages -_- <span style="">01:32, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

The history is pretty well-written, but it switches between the past tense ("She had killed many cats from all the Clans and was feared by every cat.") and the present tense ("Sunpelt, a warrior of LionClan, thinks he can defeat Mouthclaw and prove what a brave warrior he is, so he plans to kill her.") several times. Would you mind changing that, please? 18:38, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed everything into present tense, but I don't know what to do with that was. I can't think of a better word for it, because if I changed it, it wouldn't make sence. <span style="">01:14, Thu, Jan, 5, 2012

5 days without a comment, is that a good thing? <span style="">01:31, Tue, Jan, 10, 2012

Onestar-Silver Nomination
I would like to nominate Onestar, any coments?

Add a section for The Forgotten Warrior. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  02:29 Fri Dec 30

where would i add it

Under the section for Sign of the Moon. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  02:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Firestar's Quest? I haven't read that book in a while, so I don't know if there's anything *to* expand. :P 02:58, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

ok, any more comments there is nothing to add on firestars quest.

Expand Dawn. <span style="">18:41 Fri Dec 30

The style in Fire and Ice could use some work, Forest of Secrets might be possible to expand, The Darkest Hour needs to focus more on Onestar, Eclipse needs expanding, and The Forgotten Warrior does too. 21:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

i havent read the forgotten warrior what do i do

Use the browse inside of it. <span style="">23:18, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Expand The Fourth Apprentice. 02:21, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Get that expanding done Icewhisker? If you need any help, I'll help you! <span style="">00:21 Thu Jan 12

Rabbitstar ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote. I think that the overall history looks good. Comments? 01:16, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand his history anymore, or add anymore quotes? <span style="">04:14 Sun Jan 1

Can you detail/make the last sentence of his history flow more? 21:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Of course I can; All set! 21:53, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you expand/rewrite the last paragraph? 18:30, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

All set. 20:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments? 20:44, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? <span style="">00:27 Thu Jan 12

Heatherstar - Silver Nomination
I think she's ready for a silver nomination. Comments? 03:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

The page seems pretty good, but maybe the history should be expanded a bit? I have not read any of those books for a while, so you may have everything, but filling in any history gaps would make the article more informative, thus qualifying it for sliver. ;D Just Dance   Gonna be okay...

Can you rephrase the first paragraph in Bluestar's Prophecy? 19:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? <span style="">18:38 Tue Jan 3

I don't think we need to add that her deputy, Reedfeather was almost drowned in the Battle of the Clans paragraph, in my opinion. 22:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I meant the third paragraph in BP, sorry. *headdesk* The first paragraph is fine. 15:36, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Done. (^.^) 16:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Expand Pattles of the Clans? <span style="">00:31 Thu Jan 12

Rabbittail - Silver Nomination
I added some quotes. I think they describe him pretty well. Comments? 04:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Should you describe that in WindClan, they had picked out warriors to travel down in the tunnels in the beginning? 04:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I will, but, where would I add that? 04:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I added it into the quotes section. If it should be moved just tell me. 06:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Rephrase the third paragraph please. 17:25, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) - Silver Nomination
I've always loved her too! Comments? <span style="">18:33 Tue Jan 3

Can you detail Night Whispers a tad bit more? 21:07, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you work on The Sight? Just some rewording, and explain why Ivytail got first pick off the fresh-kill pile during the Daylight Gathering. 21:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand Outcast and Dark River? 21:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Done with The Sight and Night Whispers. I'll get on with Dark River and Outcast. <span style="">21:37 Thu Jan 5

Epico. 22:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, and all done. <span style="">18:15 Fri Jan 6

Any quotes? Very well done Sweet! <span style="">00:51, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Imma derp xD I'll get quotes in now. <span style="">17:09 Sat Jan 7

Besides quotes, could you please detail Long Shadows any more, if possible? 17:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can't, sorry. :/ I'm working on getting quotes. <span style="">21:46 Mon Jan 9

Quotes are in. <span style="">01:31 Wed Jan 11

Percy - Silver Nomination
Needs work, yes. Comments? 21:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. The history needs expanding majorly, and the quotes need to show more of his personality. 21:49, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Changed the main quote, rewrote the history, and worked on the quotes. 22:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

All in all, though it may be a short article, it is very well-written. Possibly expand the history slightly? Just Dance  Gonna be okay...

Thank you, Soleil. ^_^ Did some minor expanding, but I'll probably do more later on. 18:29, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nettleclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I added the only quote relating to him, and expanded his history as much as possible. Comments? 00:16, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the quote the main quote. <span style="">00:44, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Maybe detail his history a bit more. Looks good.^^ -- 19:01, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he's only seen in 1 sentence, so thats as good as I can do. And, the quote is better as a dialogue quote...so it can't be the main quote. 00:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I made a Beyond the Code section for her, and overall it looks good to me. Quotes will be added soon. 02:20, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Well done. My only suggestion would be to find a main quote that describes her a little more. 15:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart - Silver Nomination
I added 2 quotes as well as adding a description and rewrote the second paragraph of BP. Comments? 22:24, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If you can, break up the paragraphs of the history in CP, expecially the first one. Other then that, this looks great! <span style="">05:12, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Done. 00:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a while since I've read BP, and I'm curious. Does Shellheart appear anywhere else aside from the little battle at Sunningrocks? If so, please elaborate. If not, this is an article that's very detailed, despite him only being in two books. 06:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Egg
Okay, so I was looking at Brighthearts page and I saw that in her warrior name section, her past name, Lostface, was there. So I was wondering if I could add Eggpaw to Egg's apprentice name section, since Leafstar had gone through the ceremony and such, and then Egg asked for his name to be changed back. Just wanted to see if it was okay. :3 21:54, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think it should, just make it say Egg/Eggpaw. <span style="">00:40, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

I agree with DJ. c: Just Dance   Gonna be okay...

Mhm, he was still called Eggpaw, but than he got it changed back to Egg. So technically he had two apprentice names. Even if it was just for a second or so, he was still given the name. I'll add it in now, but if anyone disagrees, you can take it out. <span style="">03:07 Sat Jan 7

He was still called Eggpaw, even if only for a moment. Why wouldn't it get put on his article? 01:26, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, I'm surprised it isn't already on his article. o.o It should be, since that was his official name for a little while, like Cloudskye said. 17:19, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mhmm. Agreeing with the reasons above. ^^ -- 19:00, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I put it in but someone removed it... <span style="">21:16 Sun Jan 8

That was Shelly. She said that the ceremony was never finished... <span style="">03:48, Mon, Jan, 9, 2012

I think it can just be added to the trivia, since its true that it doesn't count as a name, even if he was called that for a moment, because the ceremony wasn't complete. 00:02, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Flower (Lo) - Silver Nomination
Expanded as much as possible, I added the only quote about her, so comments? 01:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you mention how Flower came to join Sol earlier in the history? Otherwise this looks really nice. 02:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Pepper - Silver Nomination
Comments on issues other than quotes? =3 05:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Quotes are added. =3 02:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I would like to join
Hey!

My name is Gavin and i would like to join this project!

Oh, and by the way MountainHeart and BlueOrca sent me.

Gavin Lowe 06:30, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Join Request
Can I join Project Characters?  May StarClan light your path... 

21:02, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I added a separate heading. You need to fix your siggie, so it doesn't give the time code like that. (^^) 21:05, January 11, 2012 (UTC)