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Bluebellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I hate the shading. I couldn't get it to look right.

Hm..have you looked at the shading placement on the tutorial page? I have it pulled up and the shading for that is actually on the right side of the kitten image having the light source come from the left. Maybe try using that as an example. For an admin, this needs renamed to File:Bluebellkit.kit.png — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 03:17, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

that's only a general guide. there's multiple usable sources, and this source is fine. 06:19, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the neck shading and define the light on the tail

It's a little hard to tell since the image is so small, but I think I spy a bit of waste next to that right front paw. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:23, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded *Face palm* Shading still looks weird.

No, it doesn't. Just smooth it out a little bit near the edges of it and you'll be just fine. Also, be sure to sign with four ~'s, as you haven't been leaving a timestamp with your messages. You have a signature, but I can't tell what time you left said message, and that wouldn't be good for comments, CBAing, reuploading, ect.

reuploaded I think it looks better. 02:36, September 20, 2016

Shading looks nice, but some is leaking outside of the lineart(above the tail and some on the head). Songfire (talk) 15:14, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded I think this looks good.

Define the light on the legs? 15:25, 9/21/2016

The file is named incorrectly -- should be named File:Bluebellkit.kit.png with two 'l' 's in Bluebell.

blur(?) the body shading some more. 22:03, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 49:32, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more. 03:33, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:27, September 22, 2016

There's some waste around the image mostly on <== that side. 21:40, 9/24/2016

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 00:34, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded Thats about as much as I can smudge it. 33:36, September 27 2016 (UTC)

Lighten it and define the light on the paws. 17:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded21:01:13 30 September 2016 UTC

Smooth out the shading a bit more and define the light on the tail. 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste surrounding the <- paw. Songfire (talk) 21:49, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 18:45:20 5 Oct 2016 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) - For Approval
god bless — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:37, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, and have the light be more rounded on the belly, the shape looks a bit off, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:25, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, I probably don't know about critizing my own work, but is the little "mask" alright? — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:44, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

The mask seems a little sharp up at the top, so maybe smooth it just up there in the left side :)

Re-Upps, had to do two uploads forgot to remove the waste the first time — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:08, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading; it cuts off abruptly.

Re-Upps, I redid the stomach shading so hopefully it looks better. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:08, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light source; half the shading suggests the light's coming from the front and the other half suggests that it's coming from the back/somewhere behind the haunch 07:11, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

I'm not seeing how it suggests that, the way I did it, it's coming from the front. Could I get some more comments on that possibly? I followed the shading placement, some suggestions from there trying new shading and all. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:46, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

I personally don't think it looks out of place at all. I also don't see how you think the light source is coming from behind the haunch, Scarlet? 18:45, 9/23/2016

I used this light source on all of my deputies, which were approved. That's what I based the shading placement example for this blank on. The only reason this looks different is that I smudge my shading to look textured. Although, the shading could be defined on the legs and face some so that it is more obvious that the light is coming from the front. Very nice (: 23:04 Fri Sep 23

The tail shading looks slightly blotchy, and also the shading seems to cut off a bit oddly here in a line

Re-Upps, thanks! — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:28, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading on the underbelly right by the front leg's elbow, or whatever you call it xD 14:38, 9/27/2016

Re-Upps — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 17:03, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

The stomach shading is leaking away from the lineart, and the shading on all four legs could be defined. I'd also suggest defining the facial shading as well.

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw 16:14, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the underbelly shading and add a bit more behind the leg where the underbelly meets the chest. 16:18, 9/28/2016

There's also waste around the under carriage of the image. 16:20, 9/28/2016

Could you smooth the shading on the outstretched paw?

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   19:26, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's still waste. Smooth out the underbelly shading more, and add more behind the elbow. <span style="">19:32, 9/28/2016

Re-Upps, I've smoothed the stomach as much as I can —  Minkclaw   19:46, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the farthest from us back leg by the joint, and I still think it could use a little more shading behind that elbow by the underbelly area. And possibly define the shading on the legs a little more? <span style="">23:03, 9/28/2016

Can you define the shading on the tail? 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, the front leg closest to us can't be darkened anymore as I have it at 100% now. —  Minkclaw   16:06, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, you can. Use another layer with more shading and do it that way. Also smooth out the stomach shading a lot; that area is still really blocky.

Re-Upps darkened front leg closest, hopefully that's dark enough. —  Minkclaw   16:11, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

fixed stomach shading as well, seemed too hard edged to me —  Minkclaw   16:14, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Add more shading behind the elbow. <span style="">16:20, 10/05/2016

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   16:37, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Re-added texture...—  Minkclaw   16:39, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. 18:39:15, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste under the image still by the legs. <span style="">19:25, 10/05/2016

Blizzardwing (DF) - For Approval
I am super proud of this. If Lynxkit, Elderkit, Swampkit, and Tulipkit get pages and chararts, then what Su revealed about the cats from Tallstar's Revenge and Crookedstar's Promise are just as valid.

You forgot his toesies :p <span style="">20:28, 9/20/2016

Yep, I already reuploaded with that after you pointed it out.

I get that the shading can't go very dark with this pattern, but could you define the belly shading just a little?  <span style="">01:06 Sat Sep 24 

Re-uploaded. You got it, boss.

don't know if it's my screen but his mottles seems to have a slight yellowish tint to them on the warrior, and the mottles themselves seem a bit bigger ad more...clumped together for lack of a better term. 15:27, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried a thing.

Could you smooth out the shading a little bit more on the flank area? Like where the shoulders are for both legs? <span style="">13:11, 9/27/2016

I think it's good, so I'd like to wait for a second opinion? I can barely see the shading in some spots, that area included, so I'm not too keen on smoothing it out.

Sorry I gotta agree with Winter here, can you define it? However this is really good. 14:43, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tweaked a few things here and there.

Lilystem (Star) - For Evaluation
--Falcon 49 (talk) 15:31, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

You need to add a lot more stripes to your image in order to match the previous images seen here and here. <span style="">16:08, 9/25/2016

Don't forget to say "re-uploaded" in bold text every time you reupload your image! Also, there's some waste around the image, and a few pixels around the image look out of place, as if they weren't colored in? And there's quite a bit of missing/blurred lineart on the legs and tail. <span style="">16:12, 9/25/2016  Re-uploaded.

Reuploaded again

Please sign your name after leaving a message/saying re-uploaded. Also, the earpink is covered a lot in the --> ear.

Don't forget to sign your name either xD The earpink is covered because that's ear fur. Also, define the shading in <== ear. <span style="">16:39, 9/25/2016

Whoops, and there's also waste next to that ear as well. <span style="">16:39, 9/25/2016

Re-uploaded better now? ;) --Falcon 49 (talk) 16:58, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

There are two uncoloured spots on the right ear (Our right, the cat's left). If you want, I can point them out. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 17:20, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed --Falcon 49 (talk) 18:07, September 25, 2016 (UTC) Re-uploaded. I realized the tail was a bit too dark. --Falcon 49 (talk) 18:15, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste below and above the tail, and also by the right ear

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 19:29, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading?  <span style="">21:44 Sun Sep 25 

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 13:13, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

There's some odd colored pixels in <== ear? Idk if it's just me. <span style="">23:34, 9/26/2016

Maybe you could smudge a little the stripes on the tail --Waterclaw135 (talk) 23:51, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the eye depth? <span style="">00:07 Tue Sep 27 re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 17:32, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Thin out the shading on the tail and expand the shading on his chest. 17:33, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 12:49, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

any comments?

I think there is some waste around the right side of the tail. And also around the left paw. --Waterclaw135 (talk) 23:25, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Lakeshine (Star) - For Approval
Meh. Not sure I like the shading but this is the only way I could get it to look decent without the white being too dark. I also forgot to hit submit on my reservation earlier and it was still open, so that is why it is posted so quickly. <span style="">01:58 Wed Sep 28

Hnnng, this is beautiful ;-; Could you define the depth a tad more on the white? Just at the very edges. <span style="">02:44, 9/28/2016

Could you define the shading? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 03:35, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do with it. I am restricted to mobile for now because of midterms and I have extended periods where my browser is disabled for anything other than online exam periods for one of my courses once I open my page for the prompts so I cannot run into issues regarding internet plagiarism and the other ones all require a massive amount of studying as they are my majors courses. <span style="">02:21 Fri Sep 30

Reuploaded Have I ever mentioned that I hate midterms? Not really able to change the shading much more than this. Otherwise I will be told to brighten the white. <span style="">01:48 Tue Oct 4

Could you smooth the shading out on the legs? <span style="">03:50, 10/04/2016

Reuploaded <span style="">21:17 Tue Oct 4

Brightheart (Alt. K) - For Approval
07:11, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

define the shading on the body and possibly the light on the tail — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:04, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:52, September 29, 2016 (UTC)

This is really cute :D But could you define the shading on the legs and tail?  <span style="">20:13 Thu Sep 29 

Re-uploaded 02:52, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

Possibky darken the lighter patches some more? They look a little too white. <span style="">20:55, 10/01/2016

Re-uploaded 21:13, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Darken shading, it looks too light to me. --


 * Shading is artist's preference. I think it looks alright 06:44, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Star) ~ For Approval
Hollyspots (talk) 19:51, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is TOO dark. Lighten it.  ~ Silver Cloud ~  20:09, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

What Silver said. Also smudge the earpink a bit. --

Reuploaded Hollyspots (talk) 00:52, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten it just a bit more. Also, is the nose colored?  ~ Silver Cloud ~  20:48, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

Black cats have black/dark gray noses, so it's fine the color it is. Define your lightsource, as this image looks completely black to me. <span style="">20:52, 10/01/2016

What do you mean by define the light source? Should I define the shading? Because I just lightened it. I color-picked the base from the lightest spot on his kit image, so I really don't know what to do. I also used a shading source I've seen on a lot of other images Hollyspots (talk) 20:54, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

You know how in art class when you work on 3D images? You have to make them look real, per se? It's like that, when you define your lightsource, make sure we can see where the light is coming from. Choose one spot where the light could be coming from and try to match the shading where the light wouldn't shine. If you need any more help, I'd be glad to give you a redline for a few different lightsources you could use! <span style="">22:50, 10/01/2016

Imo I think it looks fine. The base on his other images is pretty dark for a black base (But I mean, it's black, so...) which would make the image look blacker than some others. The light source they used is one that's on many other images, and I can see it fine.

I guess I'll keep it as is until I get another opinion, since the ones above (kinda?) cancel out? I used a light source I've seen on a lot of other images, so...

the base is fine, the only thing I can see with the shading is to maybe remove a little off the tailtip, since it seems contradictory to the source to me. 18:43, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Beenose (Ro) ~ CBA
I'll darken the nose in the next upload. <span style="">22:50 Sat Oct 1

Define the light and shading on the legs? Try and do kind of a half and half thing for those. Also, I feel as if the stomach and rump shading is a tad too dark compared to the other areas. Mind toning it down or darkening the rest to match those areas? <span style="">22:53, 10/01/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">23:06 Sat Oct 1

Define the texture a bit. 23:36, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smudge the black on the ear a little bit, please?  <span style="">23:39 Sat Oct 1 

Re-uploaded <span style="">18:33 Sun Oct 2

Comments before approval? 19:26, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Storkkit (Star) - For Approval
Sorry this took me a bit to get done. I'm pretty pleased with it, though. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:33, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front half of the cat? <span style="">18:47, 10/03/2016

Reuploaded. Also made the earpink brighter and pinker, you couldn't really make it out before. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:38, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

The <-- ear needs more ligtening, I can only make out the edge. --

Finchflight (Star) ~ For Approval
Pretty kitty! <span style="">18:39, 10/03/2016

maybe define the shading on the body a little by the stomach(?) 18:41, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink a tiny bit and define shading by the stomach. Pretty kitty. I agree. --

Re-uploaded I cannot define the shading by the stomach any more. Also, Neon, try not to repeat comments. Skt already said to define shading on the stomach. And the earpink is the exact color as it was on the warrior, so I'd like a second comment on that. <span style="">16:23, 10/05/2016

Smokepaw (VS)(App) ~ CBA


This needs to be short-furred. 20:04, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reyploaded Oops.

Commments before approval? 19:26, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Hi, sorry if you guys think this is bad... this is my first time making a charart for a character. My shading isn't so great, but I do like the eyes on Poolcloud. Please comment if you like or think I need improvement.

<font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:16, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

Try not to align your images^^ And also this

should technically be '~For Evaluation' since you are a kit in the Project, but eh. Perhaps try to match the placement of the white and gray better on the --> side of the cat and on the tail

Oh oops. <font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:43, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

How do I become an apprentice

<font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:44, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

Switched the heading for you (although it'll probably be switched back shortly knowing my bad timing). And to become an apprentice, basically, a lead just has to promote you when they feel your image is (according to guidelines) "50%" complete, and it seems that you know what you're doing. Doesn't take long, in most cases.^^

I made some changes- the new one is below.

You need to keep uploading under File:Poolcloud.star.png, not make a new file every time. It's a lot for us to clean up of people don't reupload under the same file. It also needs to be at the top of your section, not at the bottom.

There's waste in the space between the body and the tail. 02:12, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

darken the shading quite a bit please. I cant tell its there —  Minkclaw   16:17, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Hareflight (TR) (Star) ~ For Approval
My second charart! Comments, concerns? Jose1106 (talk) 21:03, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job, but the image needs to be named File:Hareflight (TR).star.png with the (TR) part

Fixed. Jose1106 (talk) 21:16, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Renamed. It needs to be File:Hareflight (TR).star.png, not what you have. Spacing is important for our templates to work.

Thanks for that. :) Jose1106 (talk) 10:29, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

I see a small waste at the right side of the right paw. 21:48, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 22:34, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Voleclaw (star) ~ For Approval
On a scale from bad to bad, how bad is it? 22:32, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define tail shading--  23:14, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking around the image, and throughout it in general. Try looking at the category for approved StarClan images for an idea as to how the shading should look next to the lineart.

Could you expand the earpink? Songfire (talk) 04:16, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink and make the shading colour look more similar. Are you using a darker gray as a shading tint? I'm not trying to clamp onto your creativity, but black or dark blue works better as a shading colour. Also, I don't know if I should be commenting like I am on the highlights because I don't know much about the highlights but it looks odd. And also everything above. --

Theres nothing wrong with the shading color tbh. But could you blend the highlights and shading a lil more, please?  <span style="">18:46 Wed Oct 5 

Rowanberry (Star) ~ For Approval
<span style="">22:43 Mon Oct 2016

Sharpen the cream. The warrior is the first in this set, and that isn't smudged, only blurred slightly.

Reuploaded <span style="">21:46 Tue Oct 2016

Define the shading. 19:25, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Wildfur (Star) ~ For Approval
i don't know how to tail 23:04, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste on --> side of the back

I provided you with some red-lines to better help guide your tail anatomy :P If you like, you could follow them. This one is for a tail off to the side, but if you want to keep it how the tail is now, I've provided this one to better help with that. It guides it along more smoothly perspective-wise. As it is now, it looks a little out-of-place, like it's sticking straight into the air oddly. Hope this helps, and again, you don't have to follow it if you don't want to :) <span style="">23:53, 10/03/2016

I love the pattern on this. :D Darken the shading a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:40, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded it was frustrating me so in the end I kind of settled on one inbetween up and the side, maybe it looks better now? :v and thanks, I repurposed the design from a practice charart I found on my comp :^) 18:35, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define the earpink, I can't see it very well. still thinking about that nightwing and smokepaw thing because they're related to Wildfur we came up with crazy ideas what has the chat become --

reuploaded 16:22, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Rabbitkit (Star) ~ For Approval
-- — Water  claw  03:51, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

brighten the white, and maybe darken the shading a little bit. 18:39, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload darkened the shading, brighten the white on the chest. 19:11, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload removed waste 19:26, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps define the eye depth slightly?

Reupload Defined the eye depth (is this enough?)  20:10, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Newtspeck (Star) ~ For Approval
Tiger 20:04, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Wildfur (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
i spent like twelve hours on that lineart and its still bad wtf. Back legs were meant to be posed something like this so if anyone who's any good at perspective can like. redline. that'd be great.  <span style="">19:04 Wed Oct 5 

I'll provide you a redline sometime later tonight or tomorrow, as I'm busy the rest of the day. <span style="">19:26, 10/05/2016