Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 287

Willowpelt (K) - Approved
this is gross 04:17, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Whereabouts is your light source coming from?

It is the source I've used on Rainwhisker, Hatchkit, Stormfur, and a few others. Should I change anything? -- 13:32, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

I understand it’s a source you’ve used before, but, I can’t tell where it’s coming from. I can do up a redline to help if you could let me know where the lights coming from - I’m about to head to work so I’m not much use right now.

I think it's ^^^ (because the light is shining on the bottom)? Gah, I can't explain my own sources for the life of me. -- 21:50, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

If it's going up, the back top tail, where it's being cut off by shading, should also be covered in shadow as well, or it looks like the lights are pointing from east to west. That could be a different light source, if you removed the shading on the back legs farthest from us. ❀ m ei ❀ GOGO BEBE 14:33, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 00:27, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

The shading on <--- ear looks a little blotchy. And I think with this lightsource, there'd be less shading on the face/cheek (where the head meets the neck; there'd still be shading on the neck area but here it seems to extend beyond that) and more shading on <--- side of the haunch. See this and this for what I mean if this helps ^^ 03:50, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, and also smooth out the shading on the shoulder.

Reuploaded As per usual, the shading still hates me. Well, most of it. -- 00:56, January 23, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? 15:17, January 24, 2020 (UTC)

Approved