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Feathertail (Ki) ~ Redone
she is smol. OAs were stoner and mounty 04:37 Sat Aug 29

Lighten the shading on the ===> side of the ===> leg. I cannot see the stripes under it. This is cute by the way. 22:44, August 29, 2015 (UTC)

re-uplaoded i only lightened it a tiny bit because i realy like it at the darkness it is now but i'll change it if anyoen wnats it lighter i geuss 01:38 Tue Sep 1

If you could, could you try to define the tail shading? 01:50, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Feathertail (Star) - Redone
ok round two, OA was scarletwind. 00:34 Sun Aug 30

Can you lighten the chest shading? This looks awesome 00:36, August 30, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded, also defined the stripes some. 01:02 Sun Aug 30

I think there should be two clear stripes on her neck-chest area, according to the warrior and apprentice versions. This is nice, btw

Oh and, mind if you tell me which side is the light source coming from? I'm seeing it at the right on the tail, but from left on the head and one of the paws...

reuploaded. thanks! is this better? 01:54 Mon Aug 31

Yep! Would you mind to fix the shading a tiiiny bit for these parts if you get it?

The paws are contracting the light source. Either switch that around or change your light source. 11:58, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading all around? And maybe define the stripes on her back? 14:33, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think if she lightens the shading, she'll get asked to define it (or darken it) again. For now, I think it's fine, as we don't want to send Splook into a circle of endless shading tweaks.

reuploaded. 00:03 Wed Sep 2

Now the left paw (her) shading is pretty much gone... tbh I like the old tail more and I'm feeling dumb :P is there a way to make the tail stripes look less hard edged? Maybe smudge them a little bit more?? .^.

reuploaded. edited the tail some, is this better? 22:50 Thu Sep 3

Silver tabbies have black stripes, these are gray. Darken them quite a bit please  Storm  &#9835;  23:37, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

I color picked them from the others, and they look like they match the others as well. 23:44 Thu Sep 3

She's silver-gray, not silver. The stripes are fine.

I think you should thicken the stripes on her tail, as that is what they look like on her other images. Nice <<<<<333 01:14, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Ki) - Tweaked
tweaked for defined shading. OAs consist of nightshine, rainlegs, and cloudy. 00:53 Sun Aug 30

Lighten the shading. 00:54, August 30, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the white, it's looking a little gray. 00:55, August 30, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:57 Mon Aug 31

Are you using pure white? I strongly suggest so, as it's looking like she's a pale tort. 02:01, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

Her white looks fine. 06:07, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree with you, Icy. If she doesn't tweak it now, someone else will. White should be white, not pale gray. She's looking like she has a gray base (Like Stormkit has.

reuploaded. pre-last reupload i added a white layer on top, and i brightened it some more. let me know if you need me to brighten it even more. 19:00 Mon Aug 31

hey splook i still have the file (it's a sumopaint one) so like i could just darken it and do this really fast if you'd like 22:31, August 31, 2015 (UTC)

thank you so much for your offer but really i live for shading tweaks, lol. adding a layer of shading is really simple for me! but thanks for the offer, i appreciate it :] 23:12 Mon Aug 31

Define the light on the legs? 01:50, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. 22:53 Thu Sep 3

Redscar (Star) ~ Tweaked
oa was david, tweaked to make him reddish brown. i added a little bit of extra shading to the scar because it looked out of place after i changed the colour but i can lighten/remove it if people dont want it there 01:40 Tue Sep 1

Can you define the ear pink on => ear? Nice job, by the way. 10:52, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Given it wasn't especially visible in the original, and it's in shadow due to the light source and angle of the face + the inside of the ear, I'd rather not touch it. If someone else thinks it should be defined, though, I will. tysm btw 11:35 Tue Sep 1

Could you lighten it a little bit? The medicine cat looks lighter. BCPrincess73 (talk) 14:44, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the earpink. 17:25, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mounty. Tweaked to define shading and light source

Blur and lighten the shading a tad. i still say this didn't need a tweak but whatever 11:34 Tue Sep 1

tbh it passed, so that counts,. But yeah mind defining the tail shading? 11:59, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups omg I totally forgot about this!!

Sol (KP) ~ Redone
Matching this was a terrifying experience that i will never forget 13:10, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Lol. :p the tail stripe colors don't really match 13:45, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:32, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Frog (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to add mottles. OA was Trunktail. Storm &#9835;  23:23, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) ~ Tweaked
OA is Ashshadow and tweaker is Stoneclaw. Tweaked for flat shading. 23:24, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (A) - Redone
OA was Insane. Redone to look more like Tigerstar. I used Tigerstar's warrior file and apprentice, and to make him look more like him I added the cream belly + paws. If I need to remove that, go ahead and say so. 23:30, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him more, he's dark brown. Storm &#9835;  23:34, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

I picked the color from Tigerstar's warrior and apprentice. Do you want me to do it anyways? 23:36, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yes. Wasn't this nominated a while ago to be dark? Why did this suddenly change? And can you also smudge the pale chest and smooth it into (blend) the fur more? Storm &#9835;  23:38, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: It was nominated to be redone afterwards. I darkened him and I'll smudge the stomach in the next upload. 23:41, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Told to darken it. I also kinda lied. I'll smudge the stomach in the nexttt upload I promise. Also, I'm not digging the color of the earpink. Should I change that? 00:33, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I think it could be dulled a bit yeah Storm  &#9835;  00:53, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:

The pale parts look hard edged. Blur/smudge them more? Pretty <3 01:13, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

^ same with the earpink. <span style="">02:33 Fri Sep 4

Stormtail (W) - Tweaked
OA was Echomist, darkened. 23:32, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him a lot more- you don't need to go as dark as Mistystar, but he should be darker than this.

Red (SD) ~ Redone
OA is Vixenblaze. Tweaked to match rogue. This was honestly not easy, but I gave it a try. 01:33, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Pine That Clings to Rock (Ki) - Tweaked
This is tweaked, and feel free to request the .psd if you don't believe me. In addition to defining the shading, I also had to tweak the coloring, as he wasn't quite light brown, and the highlight choices I did made the color look... really blotchy and unclean. OA of this version is me, and the original version belonged to Dapplecloud33.