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Snaketail (E) - Tweaked
Can someone help me get rid of the waste? :3. It's tweaked, honest xD. Orginal artist was Ashshadow' Neede shading blurred and gray flecks on chin. Elorisa  01:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll hlp you get rid of the waste. One moment please. 01:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some white parts on the tail, and can you blur the shading a bit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There ya go Elo =3 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there, *Was requested to get rid of re-appearing waste* One seccond, then,. ^^ . 02:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks really blurred to me; fix that? 02:37 Tue Dec 6

But the lineart isn't blurred; I checked xD. Before I reuploaded. -- Elorisa   13:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It sure looks blurred though.... And there's still empty white specks on the tail and back ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:12, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is fine, I think. Blur the highlights. 18:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is blurred. I don't care that you say it isn't...it looks odd like that. Can you fix it, please? 23:09, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't even know how I'd fix it...>.> -- Elorisa   03:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it not so dark all around the lineart. And if you truly can't do that then maybe you should withdraw this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:57, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

So I'm supposed to withdraw something because I can't do something with it...>.>. I'll just redo it. ;-; -- Elorisa   21:37, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. If you're incapable of doing what is needed, you shouldn't be working on the charart. And do you mean re-tweak it, or redo it completely? Because you still do need permission to redo completely. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Do not take on chararts that are beyond your ability. You slow down the project in doing so. Sorry if it sounds mean, but it's true. Practice chararts on your own time and then take on harder chararts in the project, but for now stick to what you can do. 16:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I retweaked it :3 -- Elorisa   21:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's a bit better. Make the gray specks smaller and blur them a bit more, and there's some white on the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I did her warrior, might as well do her kit as well. Fixed shading and highlights. OA was Pantherstorm. I did my best to get all of the waste off, if you see anymore I'll get it. Comments? 20:31, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and erase all the waste (by the tail and paws) 20:35 Tue Dec 6

Make the earpink a bit bigger on both ears. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:27, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't I not allowed to change things that weren't down for tweaking? 21:55, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Why wouldn't you change them? Might as well do it now; if it's not done now, it'll just have to be tweaked again later. 22:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry, I thought there was a rule or something, unless it was changed. Fixed earpink, shading, and waste. 20:34, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

You have to re-upload this over her kit image so it will work properly on the charart template. ;3 21:53, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. 20:12, December 8, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Brighten the eyes. 23:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste under the back paw. 23:48 Thu Dec 8

Can you darken the shading? 61.68.145.227

^^^ That was me. 07:18, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Re-Uploaded - Excuse the shading job. I've just started using layers and all, so I'm still getting the hang of it. Changes not showing. xP 14:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the ear pink. It seems to have blended in with the pelt. xD 21:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And erase the waste. 23:10 Sat Dec 10

Rockshade (W) - Redone
OA was Tawny, taken over by my dear friend Frostheart. Anyway, shading and stuff needed to be redone. I also refuse to give him a stumpy tail because he was a kit at the time. All kits have stumpy tails. 23:10, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots and tear the ear. 00:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Forgot about the ear ._. 00:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink stand out more from the ear, I can hardly see it. Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  15:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit more. 01:34 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded. 18:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a lot. It's too sharp and looks awkward. 20:59, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Just made him long furred. :3 Comments?

There's some waste above the head and ears. Cute! 23:05, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Blur the shading a bit, as well. 23:14 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded. I fixed the waste and did the best I could with the shading, but there isn't much I can do with it without turning it into a redo. 03:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Eaglekit (K)~ Tweak
Shading need to be redone. Looks like a redo but its not. OA was GroceryBag. I did some other small things to this to but i cant remember what they were... Comments? 01:23, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the dot of waste above his head. 03:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. Sky.....  Just...dust and echoes 09:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- 22:36, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) - Redone
Gotta love those ginger and white cats! Anyway, shade of ginger didn't match and it was done in a shorthair blank. So... yeah.. OA was Darkhallows, tweaked by Splashpelt and I think Oblivion. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail tip, if there is some. 20:58, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste above his ears. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if he should have a collar. In the comic at the end of SkyClan's Destiny he is shown without a collar in twoleg place at home, and he's never mentioned with a collar unlike the other daylight warriors. 22:34, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Cloudy. There's no shading on the end of his tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 23:42 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Millie (KP) - Redone
I dislike this. Original artist was Quailflight, and it needed to match. Comments? 16:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I like the stripes :3 20:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base image a bit before you darken the shading. Blur the stripes a tiny bit. 23:15 Sat Dec 10

Maybe make the ear-pink more pale pink; it's lookin' kinda purplish - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The earpink's the same colour as the other images' earpinks, so I'm not changing. 19:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Ki) - Tweaked
Hmm right he looks like cream and gray like his old warrior version, i tweaked him, Im doing his apprentice charart and this is last, kit. What i done: tweaked shadings and added one gray paw (he looks lovely to me with it xD) ,20:40,December 10,2011 (UTC)

And someone called Evanphoto is OA ,20:41,December 10,2011 (UTC)

Adderfang-(W) Tweaked


This was just a simple tweak, really, it was(Even if he IS on the re-do list.) Okay, so I did his deputy, and i felt that i should do his warrior image.....so, i just made him mottled. OA was Honeyfyr, and was then re-done by Frostheart<3 and i just made him mottled, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mottles match the deputy image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

pfffft, tell her how to do it, not just tell to match it better xD - 01:06, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well I would, except I don't know how to do those kind of mottles..... I don't know what you'd have to do to fix them. D: I just know they don't match right now. Maybe add more of them and darken the light ones so they're not so bright? I don't know. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well she should know, since she was the one who made the other image xD - 01:45, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, yes, yes i know :3 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Stormtail (W) - tweaked
Reposting, OA=Echomist - 01:10, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the earpink and blur it a little more. Much better than his old image 01:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and blur the shading a lot, it's blotchy 16:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - whatchu talking about, Sand? - 18:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, and you only have to blur the shading a tad. 19:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I just did, and I cant blur it anymore on pixlr without it being blotchy - 19:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (ki) - Redone
I just wanna see this cutie get approved. OA was Sandstar12. He needed to be longhaired. I altered his look from his original kit, I like it this way better. Comments for improvement? 01:42, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches more, make the earpink smaller and blur it - 01:43, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded bettah? 03:06, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! ^^ Blur the white a bit though It's kinda spiky. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:09, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded tried my best to balance blur and smudge, sorta hard to perfect on kits =P 18:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudging more - 18:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)