Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Nominations/Approved 4

Larchkit (Ki) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Larchkit.kit.png I can do so much better with those stripes. x.x I want this, as I still have the .xcf
 * Your image, your choice. 06:58, 07, 05, 2012
 * 19:47, May 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:48, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Splashheart ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Splashheart.warrior.png & File:Splashheart.leader.png - Shading needs to be blurred~ 03:45, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:51, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yes for the warrior, no for the leader. I recently redid that shading (recently being when I found out what Gaussian Blur is) so I think the leader's okay. I'd like the warrior, since I still have the .xcf. 02:59, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * I also think the leader's fine. 08:51, 09, 05, 2012

Whitetail ~ Tweak Nomintion
File:Whitetail.warrior.png ~ Shading could be darkened. 20:38, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * And the earpink defined.  21:47, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 08:52, 09, 05, 2012

Dawnpelt ~ Redo Nomination
File:Dawnpelt.kit.png, File:Dawnpelt.kit.alt.png, File:Dawnpelt.apprentice.png and maybe File:Dawnpelt.warrior.png - There are shading issues with all of them, and her three normal images are each different shades of cream o3o 01:15, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Hmmm, I guess you're right. And I would like her warrior image if this passes o3o  21:46, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 08:59, 09, 05, 2012
 * They do need to match...

Tawnypelt ~ Redo Nomination
File:Tawnypelt.kit.png File:Tawnypelt.apprentice.png File:Tawnypelt.warrior.png File:Tawnypelt.queen.png Okay, before you give me nay votes of hate for daring to touch such beautiful images, I'd like you guys to hear me out.

We have Tawnypelt depicted as a dark tortie, which is all fine and good, except we don't have a cite for her bieng a dark tortie. She was made a dark tortie a while ago when the word dark was added to her description without a citation. It has since been removed.

And now Tawnypelt has an alt for being depicted as a tortie-and-white and has another alt for the same description on the way.

If we have a cite for Tawnypelt being described as pale, and she's been depicted only as tortie-and-white (pale tortie and tortie-and-white being the same thing), then I believe that we should simply add the pale to her description and change her to a tortie and white, getting rid of her tortie and white alt. I'd just like to do the warrior image, if I could. I've only gotten to work with one other tortie before. However, if Ivystripe wants to do it since she'd lose her alt over this, I'd concede it to her. 02:14, May 1, 2012 (UTC)


 * I have to agree... 04:16, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Why would we need to redo the warrior? There's nothing wrong with the alternate tortie-and-white, and we could just switch that to the main image, and then just redo the queen, kit, and apprentice to match it. Breeze  whisker  04:25, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Because the alt tortie-and-white is not mottled, and because it's a replica of her image in Cats of the Clans, and we'd be better off with an original image since we don't copy book images. 04:54, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * The points Shelly gave persuaded me to cast my vote as this. :3 06:26, 01, 05, 2012

Well, I tired asking Kate on her Facebook and she agreed with this chick that told me to look on the WW even though that's why I asked in the first place, so looks like we're not getting our answer from her *sigh*  14:31, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Hazelstar (Le) - Redo Nomination
File:Hazelstar.leader.png There's like no shading, and what is there is blocky. But I also think that it looks messy in general. Like the stripes don't really look like stripes and such. Breeze whisker  03:28, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh, I would like this if it passes. Breeze  whisker  03:29, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't know who in the world didn't vote yay for this last time, but, it needs to be redone. x.x
 * Mhm 06:46, 11, 05, 2012
 * Allons-y! Skt Like a baws  10:13, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Stormkit (SC) (Ki) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Stormkit (SC).kit.png She's supposed to be gray and ginger, not white and golden brown. Plus, the stripes look painted on. The shading also needs to be blurred a bit. Since there's one image, it would be better off as a re-do. If this passes, I'd like it.
 * Sorry, but she seems fine... 00:06, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * She's white and golden brown, Stone. She needs to be ginger and gray. Golden brown and ginger aren't the same thing. Seriously, the description comes right from the book. Not a cover. Billystorm actually //says// ginger and gray. o.o
 * Belgian waffles. 00:10 Sat May 12
 * 00:49, 12, 05, 2012
 * 00:59, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lilystem (Alt.Q) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Lilystem.queen.alt.png A triangle tabby, I think. I'd like to do her if it passes. :3 (P.S I'll withdraw Frisk and do him afterwards if I'm not really supposed to claim this while two tweaks are up) Skt Like a baws 01:27, May 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * ... 01:26, 13, 05, 2012
 * 01:45, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 01:48 Sun May 13

Thistleclaw (Alt.W2) - Tweak Nomination
File:Thistleclaw.warrior.alt2.png I just feel like I could do those face markings a lot better. I would like this since I was the OA and still have the file. 09:18, 10, 05, 2012 Your image, go for it ^^ 21:42, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:10, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Harrykit (Ki) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Harrykit.kit.png Needs a paler muzzle and underside. I'll tweak it, since I have the xcf.


 * Go for it. 08:54, 09, 05, 2012
 * Yep.  01:43, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Skt Like a baws  01:41, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Shiningheart (Q) - Redo Nomination
File:Shiningheart.queen.png I assume she was supposed to get redone when her warrior was, but it never happened... Reasons being obvious. 03:50, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 07:29, 13, 05, 2012
 * Can I do this one c: 23:56 Sun May 13
 * Skt Like a baws  01:40, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pinestar (KP) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Pinestar.kittypet.png The highlights are too bright and they're blotchy, plus I think that shading could have been more blurred. Skt Like a baws  01:59, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * God, I wanted to kill this thing months ago. Please, kill it with fire.
 * Can I do him? 02:03 Mon May 14

Mounty, I'd just like to point out you've already got a redo for approval, and you just asked to do Shiningheart... Please don't kill me, but that seems like too many ^^; Mind if I have him...? -runs- 02:05, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Loonie's right, Mounty. I say if she wants him, let her have him.

Kestrelwing (MC) - Tweak Nomination
File:Kestrelwing.mc.png The shading needs darkened and blurred. Breeze whisker  04:33, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * I misread that as "Kestrelflight" and thought "Ivy's gonna kill someone". xD But yes, this one could go for a tweak.
 * I did that same thing XDDDD 04:36 Thu May 17
 * Oh you guys! XD Anyway, since I've taken a temporary leave, I don't think I'm allowed to vote. But it does need tweaked 04:40, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh, KestrelWING. Uhhh...-runs- <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  05:44, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Sharpclaw (SC).kit.png The colours should match the other images. 22:24, May 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * You didn't read the heading at the top of the page. Nominations are //closed// right now. >.> Never mind. I can't count. x.x
 * Okay... <span style="">06:42, 11, 05, 2012
 * Can you also blur the stripes a tad?  01:44, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * In defense of my art, I frankly think the colors do match as I got them straight off of the deputy image. 01:47, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 'Teldy's right in my opinion. It looks fine. _-_ 07:11, May 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * It's fine, imho.
 * The colors match fine, however it looks a bit like it has a dark muzzle instead of a lighter.... Teldy, any chance of you tweaking that? I assume you still have the xcf. Everything else is perfectly fine. 03:49, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * For the muzzle only. It almost looks gray instead of pale ginger.  15:43, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Cedarpelt.warrior.png Alright, there's nothing in the rules saying non-PCA members can't nominate something. I'd just like to see the lineart on his tail redone. His tail would look a bit fluffier when it's that short. As it is, he kinda looks like he has a club for a tail. 07:43, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Honestly, I never really had a problem with the tail on this image, but sure... 23:20, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Eh, why not. <span style="">06:48, 17, 05, 2012
 * I always thought he should  15:43, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Graypool.elder.png (et al..) So..I found a cite for her being dark grey, so a quick fix to make her darker. XP <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws 23:12, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yup~ 23:19, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Course. I can do the warrior, still have all the layers. Simple bucket fill fix. XD 03:50, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Mhm <span style="">06:48, 17, 05, 2012

Hawkfur (W) - Tweak Nomination
File:Hawkfur.warrior.png The shading needs blurred. Breeze whisker  04:29, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * I dun see why not.
 * <span style="">06:48, 17, 05, 2012
 * 15:44, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Dewspots (W) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Dewspots.warrior.png - Looks like a triangular tabby, and I don't think it really matches her description. I think by "spotted tabby" they must have meant something like this rather then a tabby cat with silver spots on top. I'd like this if it passes~ 22:01, May 7, 2012 (UTC) : This was redone for the same reason before...I like this image, and I think that these spots are fine-artist's choice. 23:32, May 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't really think its about whether it looks good or not. It's about what's natural and what fits her description. Her current image looks more like a dappled tabby; almost like Cinderheart, rather then a spotted tabby. 02:53, May 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * ...I guess, there are also other issues too... o.o 8/ <span style="">08:59, 09, 05, 2012

Eh, sure. 18:53, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry but I think it's fine... 03:54, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Don't kill me... <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  06:09, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Pineclaw.warrior.png the earpink is odd, the shading could be define, and it looks like he has a lighter muzzle. I'd like to do him if he passes. (Is this guy even real? I found him by accident. O.o) <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws 08:30, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">09:29, 15, 05, 2012
 * 15:46, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Rose (KP) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Rose.kittypet.png I dunno...the shading seems a little off, and it needs to be blurred / extended / darkened. Imho, to make things easier, since it's only one image, I think a re-do would be okay. If this passes, I'd like it. If not, I'll nominate for a tweak..
 * If this passes, you might want to redo the colors, too. They're not very realistic for a Siamese and could be different shades of cream and brown. Breeze  whisker  04:04, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">06:51, 17, 05, 2012
 * Don't kill me but I think the shading could just be blended and then a new shading layer added to it.  15:46, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * No, the colors are also a bit off and it's grey in some places, plus the brown's too blurred with the white, it makes it look a bit blotchy and messy. As long as the same design is kept, it should definitely be a redo.  15:07, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

I've got the .xcf for Lily, so I can send you the colours if you like. 20:50, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Molepaw (OTS) - Redo Nomination
File:Molepaw (OTS).kit.png, File:Molepaw (OTS).apprentice.png Gonna give this another shot. The brown should be fixed to a more "browner" color and the cream on the apprentice to a more "creamier" color. Seems enough to be a redo. :/ <span style="}}">08:09, 14, 05, 2012
 * Um.. I asked Twee and she said she still has the .xcf file, so I think the apprentice should be a tweak instead :/ 19:10, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * It seems fine...Many of these brown cats seem to have a "red-like color hue". It really seems fine to me. 23:18, May 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Though honestly I think the OA could tweak it. If both images do get redone, however, keep the original style or I will eat you XD  15:45, May 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Seriously. What Ivy said.
 * I actually think the brown is okay... <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  03:53, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * I've already stated my opinion on this multiple times, I don't think I need to repeat so I'll just vote yes. 15:10, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt. Q) - Tweak Nomination
File:Ferncloud.queen.alt.png The shading should be blurred and the earpink toned down just a tad. I also think the eye color should match. 01:56, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * o.o <span style="">07:57, 14, 05, 2012

20:57, May 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:11 Fri May 18

Featherstorm ~ Redo Nomination
File:Featherstorm.queen.png The stripes look blotchy, and somewhat triangle-ish in my opinion, and it could use a good shading fix. I'd like this if it passes. o3o 09:58, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * I completely and totally agree the shading needs to be redone, but the stripe style's fine, please keep it if you redo. But yeah, it'd be a bit silly to ask you to tweak that shading.... just keep the pattern and you'll be fine. 02:08, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * What Paleh said. This image was always one of my favourites.<3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  02:50, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * However, I'd suggest to tweak the image-just add shading, and keep the stripes. 02:27, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Foxclaw (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Foxclaw.warrior.png Redtail's russet alt has stripes so shouldn't Foxclaw? I'd like to do this since I have the layers. 19:24 Mon May 21
 * Your image.
 * I think Foxclaw would  03:52, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sure, if you want. <span style="">09:41, 22, 05, 2012

Morningstar (Le) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Morningstar.leader.png The shading could be defined in some places. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  09:02, May 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry but I think it's fine. 02:08, May 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * It seems fine to me... :/ My opinion. <span style="">07:12, 21, 05, 2012
 * I honestly think that the shading could be defined in some places...it doesn't seem like there's much there, if any at all. However, that's the only thing that needs to be tweaked with this image.
 * Agreeing with Cloudy.  20:31, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14:24, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Dawnstripe.warrior.png Hope I did this right. Her shading looks odd, slightly blotchy.. It just doesn't look right to me. (I would like to do this if it passes) -- 09:46, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Quite honestly, I was thinking a redo would be better, just to make the stripes and colors match the queen better. But if you can tweak it, go ahead. 13:20 Tue May 22
 * Agreeing with what Mounty said on this.  20:25, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * " " " <span style="">09:25, 23, 05, 2012

Feathertail ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Feathertail.apprentice.alt.png, File:Feathertail.warrior.alt.png & File:Feathertail.warrior.alt2.png -- Tails should be floofy since its the same cat. I'd like her alt. apprentice if this passes~ 17:59, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Could I have her alt. warrior? (not the second one)  20:32, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Dang it, I should have voted sooner.... *asked fallow for that alt in skype* 09:04, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Meep <span style="">09:25, 23, 05, 2012

Songbird - Tweak Nomination
File:Songbird.queen.png Her description says light brown. She's more dark than light and it should be tweaked. I'd like this if it passes. Breeze whisker  20:52, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:13 Tue May 22
 * <span style="">09:25, 23, 05, 2012
 * 14:22, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Brindleface ~ Redo Nomination
File:Brindleface.kit.png It might just be me but her Kit image doesn't look anything like her other images, it looks sort of tabby to me =P -- 05:11, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yep. Can I do her please? 05:14 Thu May 24

Sure! :3 -- 05:15, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Dude, she is a tabby, but yeah. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  05:16, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Oh ._. Well then. ..Derp.. Then shes definitely not the Same kind of tabby as her other images xDD -- 05:21, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah... and also Raven, when commenting on a tweak nomination, before your comments, add, just for more more organisation. ;)  <span style="">06:36, 24, 05, 2012

Onestar (Ki) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Onestar.kit.png o3o The colors don't match any other images, and the pattern is...off. I'd like this one if it passes. 09:59, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * Dang, you read my mind. o.o I like seriously just looked at that and came over to nominate it, and you already did. xD The shading's also a bit blotchy on it.... if you use gimp I could send you the .xcf for the colors if you'd like? 14:09, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22:17, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Runningnose.elder.png I'll probably get shot down, but eh, whatevs. The grey is too dark and looks really blotchy (that might be the shading...) andthe patches don't match..I'd like him if it passes. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  08:59, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * *stares oddly* I'm sure this was nominated before.... 0.o But oh well, yes it needs to be redone, we agreed on that back when the MC image was redone. 09:21, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * Kill with fire, please.
 * 17:35, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (E) - Redo Nomination
File:Talon.elder.png Sorry teldy, buuut.... that shading (done by me.... ew. XD) could be redone and the stripes don't really match the caveguard much. If Teldy still has the layers, she's free to do this, but if not, I'd like it if this passes. 07:20, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * As I voiced on Skype. xD
 * 13:20, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14:10, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Lichenfur.loner.png, File:Lichenfur.elder.png & File:Lichenfur.loner.alt.png She is shown with an under bite many times in the manga, so I think it should be added into her images. I would like her elder if this passes~  17:41, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * Eh <span style="">02:36, 27, 05, 2012
 * I actually noticed this and was going to nominate it myself but I forgot. (don't worry, I'm not interested in doing it, you go right ahead)  03:47, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * I still have the layers for her alt. I can do that one. 03:49 Mon May 28

Robinwing (TC) (W and Q)~ Tweak Nomination
File:Robinwing (TC).queen.png and File:Robinwing (TC).warrior.png; There's almost no shading on the warrior, and the queen's bothers me. I still have the xcf for both, and I'd like them if it passes. Since they're my images... I don't see a problem with it.
 * Your images. <span style="">02:43, 27, 05, 2012
 * 13:22, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't see a problem with that  03:50, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (W and Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Poppyfrost.warrior.pngFile:Poppyfrost.kit.png Both could use some darker shading. Breeze whisker  04:51, May 27, 2012 (UTC)


 * There is also some white pixels on the warrior image that could be fixed.  13:21, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * That warrior image... has shading? 0.o And yus, kill those blasted white pixels with fire, they've bugged me to no end for ages xD 14:09, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Of course  03:49, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (Ki) - Redo Nomination
File:Sedgewhisker.kit.png Hi guys, I'm not supposed to be on but its a weekend so I thought I might as well contribute. She needs to match her other chararts. 14:33, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * ...redoubt?  15:58, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16:29, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'd like this, if that's okay ^^ 17:08, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart (D) - Redo Nomination
File:Shellheart.deputy.png I feel that he needs to match the elder more, and plus there's shading issues... I'd like this if it passes. 16:52, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * No  22:21, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22:28, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * It does have some shading issues. Breeze  whisker  04:21, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchfur (A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Scorchfur.apprentice.png He doesn't quite match the apprentice warrior. An easy thing to do. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws 14:16, May 24, 2012 (UTC)


 * Can we tweak the apprentice instead? The warrior was approved first and the shading on the apprentice doesn't really make much sense :/ 04:41 Mon May 28
 * Oyeah, Rainly and I decided to do the apprentice instead, so someone can like..decline this. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  04:47, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * Or we can change it lol I'll strike out the stuff 04:56 Mon May 28
 * lol yeah. <span style="">06:09, 28, 05, 2012
 * May I do this since I was the last OA? :3 23:32, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * I checked with Trolly and she said it's fine^^ 23:36, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (W) - Tweak Nomination
File:Lionblaze.warrior.png Shading is too dark and should be lightened and defined. 18:17, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * Ah yeah I've been wanting to kill his shading for a long time. I still have the layers. 18:20 Mon May 28
 * It's Mounty's image, so, uh, yeah^^. 18:27, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * Breeze whisker  03:56, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Cinderfur.elder.pngFile:Cinderfur.deputy.png The deputy's shading is blotchy, the elder's doestoo, plus it's not the same shade of grey...I'd like the elder should it pass. :S <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws 05:37, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Just my opinion, feel free to shoot me down, but I think it could be just a tweak... :/ <span style="">06:38, 24, 05, 2012
 * The shading on the deputy is fine, and one of them could get tweaked to just get lighter/darker.  20:07, May 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Hmmmm...how about a tweak to the deputy to make it darker then? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  08:59, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yep, I think that will do.  17:34, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * I still have the photoshop file, so I'll tweak it 05:40, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * for the tweak  03:53, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * Tweaking, yes. <span style="">06:15, 28, 05, 2012
 * Agreed. And since I'm about to archive this, I'm gonna just go ahead and change the heading so people don't get confused when looking back on this. 10:47, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Snaketooth - Redo Nomination
File:Snaketooth.warrior.png That stripe pattern is not realistic. The shading is also blotchy and without a real light source. Leafstrike can have it if she wants, since it's her image, but otherwise I'd like it. Breeze whisker  04:40, May 27, 2012 (UTC)


 * 13:18, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Don't take this the wrong way, but I think that's a little exaggerated. All I believe needs to be done is the stripes filled in a little more, but the image looks fine otherwise in my opinion.  03:57, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't think filling in the stripes would make it look more realistic. They're all zigzaggy, like lifelines. I'm pretty sure tabbies don't look like that. And I really do think that the shading is inconsistent with it's light source. Breeze  whisker  04:18, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * True I guess. <span style="">06:22, 28, 05, 2012
 * While I absolutely love those stripes, breeze is right about it not really being realistic.... maybe keep the basic pattern and just tweak it till it's realistic? 10:48, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Barley (Ki) - Redo Nomination
File:Barley.kit.png White's a bit dark, black's pure black on a lot of parts, there's blurred lineart, black's over blurred, and almost no visible shading. It'd be easier to just redo all together. I'd like this if it passes. 11:56, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * Haha Braely XD 13:19 Tue May 29
 * Definitely. Breeze  whisker  13:58, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail - Redo Nomination
File:Dappletail.apprentice.pngFile:Dappletail.warrior.pngFile:Dappletail.queen.pngFile:Dappletail.elder.png I'm gonna get eaten, but this really isn't a dappled tortoiseshell cat. It's more of a torbie, and I believe a dappled cat would look more like this, or even like this. Neither of which are striped like Dappletail is right now. I'm nominating this for a redo instead of a tweak because it would be hard to edit the stripes into dapples. She could still be done with the same placement of dark and white, though. I would like the elder if this passes. Breeze whisker  19:46, May 29, 2012 (UTC) I always thought her images look odd. She looks like a black cat with orange stripes. Go for it~ 21:21, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * Kelsey says kill with fire. <3
 * You make the elder look good, yarr? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  22:16, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Whitestorm (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Whitestorm.kit.png This is more personal preference, but the tufts just don't really.... look like tufts. And since it's my image, I'd like to tweak them. Kay? 14:16, May 29, 2012 (UTC)


 * Breeze whisker  14:18, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  11:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  11:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Redtail.kit.png Same reason as Whitestorm since I'm the OA. 14:16, May 29, 2012 (UTC)


 * Breeze whisker  14:18, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  11:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  11:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rain (E. alt) - Tweak Nomination
File:Rain.elder.alt.png I feel that the highlights are too bright and the shading could be blended better. Also, if the main redo image passes, this image might also need a missing eye since I intend to do it on the side facing us. If not, then I don't think think this image would need a missing eye  04:33, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">06:47, 30, 05, 2012
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  11:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14:20, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (KP) - Tweak Nomination
File:Hussar.kittypet.png - I feel that the shading could be darkened and the existing shading blended more thoroughly. 04:58, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Eh, why not. <span style="">06:47, 30, 05, 2012
 * I wasthinking of nominating this too xD <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  11:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * 14:20, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rain (E) - Redo nomination
File:Rain.elder.png- I feel that the speckles look painted on and should extend to the face, I think his points might need stripes, the shading needs to be darker and more dynamic and blended better, and if this and the alt passes, I think he should be shown with a missing eye. I'd love to do this one if this passes, please? 04:37, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Like I said on Rain (tobe), we never decided that all speckled cats should have stripes on their points, but if you're redoing him completely you can do what you want. But yes, everything else definitely needs to be changed. 14:24, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Ugh, that shading. Breeze  whisker  16:41, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh jeez yes x.x 03:57 Sat Jun 2

Brokenstar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Brokenstar.rogue.pngFile:Brokenstar.leader.png and possibly File:Brokenstar.deputy.png They require scars and torn ears. Not quite sure about the deputy though. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  11:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * We'd have to have someone check the cite for torn ears and see when it was he got them, but since the scars were mentioned late in the series, he wouldn't get those on his deputy. I'd like the leader if that's Ok. 14:23, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Breeze whisker  16:04, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">11:51, 01, 06, 2012

Oakfur - Tweak Nomination
File:Oakfur.apprentice.png File:Oakfur.warrior.png. Just need the burn tool run over them. 23:58, May 30, 2012 (UTC)


 * Yup, those are not dark brown. Breeze  whisker  16:41, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  03:44, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">11:51, 01, 06, 2012

Applefur (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Applefur.kit.png There's almost no visible shading, needs more of a reddish tint to match warrior, and the earpink needs to be more natural (on both images, but the warrior can be tweaked without nomination). I'd like this one. 00:47, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * Breeze whisker  16:39, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  03:44, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  03:44, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Cloudpelt.apprentice.png File:Cloudpelt.warrior.png File:Cloudpelt.deputy.png To me the shading looks pretty blotchy on all of his images, but mostly his deputy and warrior. -- 23:11, May 31, 2012 (UTC)


 * Really sorry.. I should have checked the declined archives first before posting this. His deputy image was declined when someone else tried to nominate it for the same reason I am. -- 02:27, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * I actually agree, even though it was declined... owo -flies away- <span style="">11:51, 01, 06, 2012
 * As do I. Might I have the apprentice if it passes?


 * Sure! I would like to do the warrior if its okay, -- 03:46, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

04:25, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Poppycloud.queen.png The shading could be defined. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  03:44, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">11:51, 01, 06, 2012
 * 04:25, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13:32, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sunstrike (A) - Tweak Nomination
File:Sunstrike.apprentice.png If this weren't my own image, I would probably not even bother. But I really feel that the way the patches are compared to her warrior do not match. The warrior's is much more blurred than in mine, and in general, I think I could do a better job. That is all I would touch though, no shading tweak, no nothing. C:  03:49, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * If you want to sure. 03:59 Sat Jun 2
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  07:26, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13:31, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png Needs a gray muzzle. Simple enough. 14:20, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * 04:26, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13:31, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16:11 Sat Jun 2

Blackclaw ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Blackclaw.warrior.png File:Blackclaw.elder.png Needs a torn ear. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws 07:26, June 2, 2012 (UTC)


 * I have the xcf, so I'll work on it. Unless someone else wants it. If you do, be my guest. XD
 * Although, I do want that elder. The shading bothers me greatly, and I want to redo it.
 * Your image, Cloudy. If you want to redo it, go for it x3  13:54, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16:11 Sat Jun 2

Ice (Ki) - Redo Nomination
File:Ice.kit.png Same as Snake. I'd like this if it passes~ 18:47, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19:42 Sat Jun 2
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  01:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (Ki) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Snake (BC).kit.png - Needs to match other images. I'd like this if it passes, though Maplepool can have it if she wants because it's her image. 18:43, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19:42 Sat Jun 2
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  01:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Breeze whisker  01:01, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw (KP) (A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png File:Birdpaw.kittypet.png They need gray muzzles. I want the kittypet if this passes. 23:38, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  01:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Breeze whisker  00:58, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Petalfur (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Petalfur.warrior.png Aw jeez, please don't eat me for this D8 The shading blends into the gray and white and the highlights are really blotchy and hard to see. I'd like to do this one if it passes. 19:45 Sat Jun 2


 * Maybe define the grey and white border a little, also. It looks kinda odd. Breeze  whisker  01:00, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:22, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:22, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sunstar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Sunstar.leader.pngFile:Sunstar.deputy.png I can barely see the shading, so...defining, anyone? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws 01:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Agree. Breeze  whisker  00:57, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * I would like the leader, if that's alright. ^.^  20:22, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * I would like the leader, if that's alright. ^.^  20:22, June 4, 2012 (UTC)


 * }

Talon (CG) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Talon.cg.png Needs ragged fur. 'Teldy's already got the elder up, so she says she'll tweak it.
 * Breeze whisker  00:56, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:23, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">10:19, 05, 06, 2012

File:Rockshade.kit.png I hope I'm doing this right. The shading looks like it could be redone, blotchiness, and I can't really see the light source. Sincerely: ChanCharm 07:38, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Rockshade (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Rockshade (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
 * In my opinion, I think this should be redone. Like ChanCharm said, the shading needs to be redone.  19:04, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Eh why not let it be redone. <span style="">03:47, 17, 06, 2012
 * It's honestly not that hard to smooth in a bit of highlights. It'd would do very fine as just a tweak. 16:25, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * It's very easy to tweak that. As long as you can get the lineart and the rest of the image on a separate layer.
 * Could I have this? <span style="">06:25, 18, 06, 2012
 * 22:02 Mon Jun 18

File:Stormfur.apprentice.png File:Stormfur.loner.png File:Stormfur.kit.png I feel as though the shading is a bit blotchy and without a consistent light source on the apprentice, and the loner and kit need to be darker to match the other chararts. Breeze whisker  16:14, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Stormfur - Tweak Nomination
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Stormfur - Tweak Nomination
 * can I have the apprentice and loner? I still have the files. 01:08, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * If you still have the files, yes. it'll make it a lot easier.
 * 22:02 Mon Jun 18
 * 22:02 Mon Jun 18

File:Rosetail.elder.png File:Rosetail.warrior.png File:Rosetail.apprentice.png File:Rosetail.kit.png I feel as though the stripes from the rest of the body would continue onto the tail since it is still ginger. Breeze whisker  16:35, June 17, 2012 (UTC) Wouldn't that be the same case for Redtail then since his tail is ginger? 18:41, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Rosetail - Tweak Nomination
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Rosetail - Tweak Nomination
 * No Redtail's a tortie, stripes are optional on them. 19:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22:02 Mon Jun 18
 * 22:02 Mon Jun 18

File:Clovertail.warrior.png - Define shading/highlights. 01:31, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Clovertail (W) - Tweak Nomination
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Clovertail (W) - Tweak Nomination


 * Also, the white goes up all the way to the throat. It only goes partway up the chest in her other image. Breeze  whisker  16:15, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22:02 Mon Jun 18
 * 22:02 Mon Jun 18

File:Dapplenose.apprentice.png, File:Dapplenose.warrior.png, File:Dapplenose.elder.png - I dunno, the pattern just really puts me off and when I looked up mottled gray cats, their mottles were sharper, darker, and smaller. The pattern that Dapplenose has kinda reminds me of a turtle shell... I want the warrior 22:42, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Dapplenose - Redo Nomination
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Dapplenose - Redo Nomination
 * The warrior doesn't match either image. It's too light... as for the other two... I always thought mottles were smaller, kinda like Kestrelflight's, or another cat like that. (  ahaha, turtle shell  )
 * Yeah. Can I do her apprentice? 22:52 Mon Jun 18
 * Agreed. This is spotted, not mottled. Can I have the elder? Breeze  whisker  23:57, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

File:Dapplenose.apprentice.png, File:Dapplenose.warrior.png, File:Dapplenose.elder.png - I dunno, the pattern just really puts me off and when I looked up mottled gray cats, their mottles were sharper, darker, and smaller. The pattern that Dapplenose has kinda reminds me of a turtle shell... I want the warrior 22:42, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Dapplenose - Tweak Nomination
 * <h3 style="margin: 0in 0in 10pt; line-height: normal; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-outline-level: 2;">Dapplenose - Tweak Nomination
 * The warrior doesn't match either image. It's too light... as for the other two... I always thought mottles were smaller, kinda like Kestrelflight's, or another cat like that. (  ahaha, turtle shell  )
 * Yeah. Can I do her apprentice? 22:52 Mon Jun 18
 * Agreed. This is spotted, not mottled. Can I have the elder? Breeze  whisker  23:57, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Velvet ~ Redo Nomination
File:Velvet.kittypet.png File:Velvet.queen.png Two things; one neither image is silver, but more of a white. Two, the shading on both images needs to be redone, and since I no longer have the file for the queen, it's better off as a redo. If it passes, I'd like both. Woo~ 19:50, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  22:00, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Teller of the Pointed Stones (Ancient) (H) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Stoneteller (Ancient).healer.png The shading is very hard to see on here. Simple fix. I'd like to do this one if it passes. 22:26 Mon Jun 18
 * <span style="">08:41, 19, 06, 2012
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  00:48, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  00:48, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Furzepelt ~ Redo Nomination
File:Furzepelt.warrior.png or File:Furzepelt.apprentice.png They don't match lol. Not really sure which one should be done, so I'll leave it up to yous. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 15:53, June 15, 2012 (UTC)


 * I thought the apprentice was supposed to be tweaked/redone to match the warrior  17:09, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * The apprentice was suppose to be done. Look in the second archive. v.v. 17:25, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

In that case, can I have the apprentice? 23:12, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * If Loonie wants it, let her have it.
 * <span style="">06:23, 16, 06, 2012

Berrynose ~ Redo Nomination
Kit, Kit alt, apprentice, warrior. Okay, now, before you all send me to the shooting range for target practice, let me explain myself. The shading on the kit and alt kit need to be blurred, extended and just overall redone. That's not counting the fact that the colors for both kit images do not match any of the others. The apprentice image does not match //any// of the images in question, and looks more off-white than cream, and needs to be changed. As for the warrior, there's little to no shading at all, and while I realize that can be a tweak, I would personally like to take the alt I most recently did and layer the warrior's lineart over it so it matches. However, if you feel the warrior is fine, so be it. The others need to have something done to them to match the other images. I would like the apprentice if it passes, because I adore that lineart. If no one else wants the others, I'll work on 'em too. I'm going to take the colors from the alt warrior and use them to redo the other images. cream cats are a pain, I know.


 * You do not know how much these images annoy me. I, myself, if possible would like to the kit since I still have base pelt colour, shading colour, etc. But it's fine if you would like to do these yourself :3 22:37, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Well the apprentice and warrior could both be tweaks, but the kits definitely need redoes. If my internet's working well enough by the time this passes (if it does) I'd like both the kits if that's alright.
 * 22:44 Wed Jun 6
 * As cloudy pointed out, if this passes, the whole set does. So I'm changing my vote. I don't support the warrior and apprentice being redone. Repost the kits for a redo and I'll vote yay, but for now, my vote is now. 22:46, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * I agree with them being redone. Each of them has their own problems that Cloudy listed. 22:51, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * I've asked Shelly for the file for the apprentice, that way it can technically be "tweaked", since that seems to be the only way this'll get settled. I still want it though. xD
 * I'm sending it to her. I've no problem with the color being changed. I'm the first to admit that solid light coloured cats have never been my forte, and I've no problem with it being tweaked. I'm glad you adore my lineart, tho. :3 23:06, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * I moved the apprentice and warrior to the tweaked section, and the kit and kit alt will stay here. And Shelly, I don't intend on changing the lineart. Just the colors.
 * Very well, I'm happy with that now. And I'd still like the kits if that's alright... 23:19, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">01:48, 07, 06, 2012

Brightheart (Alt. W2) - Redo Nomination
File:Brightheart.warrior.alt2.png - I'd like to add some more spots/dapples to the pattern. I want this. 01:10, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Your image.
 * 01:45, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * ^^ <span style="">01:48, 07, 06, 2012

Clawface (A) - Tweak Nomination
File:Clawface.apprentice.png - Tweak ear-pink to match other chararts 00:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * We don't nominate to tweak the ear pink. Just fix it.
 * Alright, since this is here..does anyone else agree that all of Clawface's images could be tweaked to be more brown? It looks so..yellow...and Oatwhisker's was tweaked for that same reason. :/ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  00:35, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * ...good point. I'm up for Skt's suggestion. 8D
 * For Skt's. <span style="">01:45, 07, 06, 2012
 * Skt's idea.

I can haz warrior? 22:57, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Graystripe.warrior.png (et al) Seems we overlooked the fact that he's cited for being shaggy. I figure in this case his chararts could be tweaked to look a bit like Shellheart's elder or Smokefoot's warrior images. 02:21, June 5, 2012 (UTC) I would think so. May I do this? =3 02:50, June 5, 2012 (UTC) or Woody. =P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  09:24, June 5, 2012 (UTC) True <span style="">10:19, 05, 06, 2012

Waspwhisker (W) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Waspwhisker.warrior.png The shading is blotchy, the gray looks over-blurred, and the earpink is hard to see on both images. 16:38, June 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * It's fine. -.- <span style="">09:04, 06, 06, 2012
 * I honestly think that shading is iffy <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  12:28, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * I've been thinking about nominating this. I say kill it. Breeze  whisker  17:39, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * It needs to be redone. There's only so many times you can tweak an image before it starts to look iffy... Just redo it, and we won't face this problem again.

Whitethroat (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Whitethroat.warrior.png The shading...it burns...... x.x Since it's my image, I'd like to redo the shading, and it's only a tweak since I still have the .xcf.
 * Your image ^^  22:36, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * lol <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  22:58, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * 01:18, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt W) - Tweak Nomination
File:Cinderheart.warrior.alt.png - Shading is flat. I'd like this one if it passes. 00:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 01:24, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 01:46, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 01:46, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose ~ Tweak Nomination
apprentice warrior. See the nomination below as to why these two have been moved (too lazy to type it out). The apprentice is still mine, since I now have the .xcf.


 * 01:20, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * I have the .xcf for the warrior, so may have that one?  01:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">01:37, 07, 06, 2012

Blackclaw (Kit. Alt) - Tweak Nomination
File:Blackclaw.kit.alt.png - Blotchy shading. Easy to fix. 00:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 01:20, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">01:38, 07, 06, 2012
 * 01:46, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Briarlight - Tweak Nomination
File:Briarlight.kit.png, et al. - The alt apprentice and apprentice are lighter than the warrior and the kit. They should be tweaked to match shades of brown. 00:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Don't you //dare// touch that warrior image. It's fine. I just recently re-did that. I have the .xcf, for those that wish to obtain the colors. Also, is anyone going to mind that I steal the apprentice? Not the alt, but the normal one. XD
 * Yeah I guess, though it's not that noticeable  01:22, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Eh sure. <span style="">01:39, 07, 06, 2012

Dawnpelt - Tweak Nomination
File:Dawnpelt.apprentice.png, File:Dawnpelt.warrior.png - Darken the shading; it looks flat. I'd like these if they pass. 00:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * I have the .xcf for the apprentice. I'll send it to you, as this was just recently redone. I do agree that I should have darkened the shading on the apprentice... My bad. xD
 * The apprentice yes. The warrior, unsure. If that gets tweaked I think the kit should too. imho :/ <span style="">01:47, 07, 06, 2012
 * The kit's fine, imho. The shading is a lot harder to work with on the kit images than you think...and cream cats make it worse. x.x All the colors are the same on both the kit and apprentice, as I just recently re-did them both.
 * Also agreeing with the apprentice. And yes, if the warrior gets tweaked, the kit should too. Kit shading may be hard, but it's not impossible, and if the warrior's shading isn't dark/defined enough, the kit's wouldn't be either. 09:31, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt Q) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Daisy.queen.alt.png As Maple pointed out, she was called white in The Sight, when her kits were apprentices. This would mean this is a non-pregnant queen image, therefore needed the other lineart. Since I just recently did like...like a month ago, I'll work on it and quickly slap the other lineart over the image.
 * Good point. <span style="">08:10, 07, 06, 2012
 * Yes indeed. Breeze  whisker  20:38, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  00:36, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Diesel ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Diesel.kittypet.png Alright. Since we make unknown tabbies brown, and Clovertail's alt tabby queen is coloured, what do you think of making him brown too? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 00:42, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think this is okay. It does say a light tabby tom, which means light brown. <span style="">02:36, 09, 06, 2012
 * I would like this one, if that's alright.  17:20, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * I would like this one, if that's alright.  17:20, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Stripes (Alt. Ro) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Stripes.rogue.alt.png 'kay, one thing, the shading is extremely blotchy and needs to be fixed..and you can't even tell the base from the lineart. It looks...iffy. Since it's only one image, it would be better fitted for a redo... Sorry, Wild. e.e If this passes, I'd like it, since y'all know of my love of the epical black kittehs. <3
 * This could be tweaked... Even if it's just one image, but I honestly think that this is a tweak. 00:40, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * I say just move it to the tweaks. <span style="">02:38, 09, 06, 2012
 * Now. <span style="">03:33, 09, 06, 2012
 * 02:35 Sun Jun 10
 * 17:43, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Harveymoon (KP) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Harveymoon.kittypet.png To me, the shading needs to be defined heaps, it almost looks as if there is no shading. If it passes, Loonie should probably have it, as it's her image. Comments? 10:07, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * I forgot to nominate this lol <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  13:39, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13:45, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lolyep. I can haz? 15:14, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Whitefang ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Whitefang.warrior.png File:Whitefang.apprentice.png The stripe pattern on the tail is unrealistic. Simple as that. When I made it, I was still n00by with tabbies... I'd like both images if it passes. ^^;
 * The game. 19:58 Sun Jun 10
 * -insert your mum joke here- <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  21:59, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes. 22:32, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) - Tweak Nomination
File:Cherrypaw (TC).kit.png, File:Cherrypaw (TC).apprentice.png - kit's more orangey and a bit more vivid than apprentice. 00:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * Why nominate both if only one needs to be tweaked though? If you guys decide to have the apprentice tweaked, I'll do it since I have the .xcf  01:24, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think the kit could be tweaked. <span style="">01:42, 07, 06, 2012
 * For the kit. 68.103.240.28 22:41, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, that was me. Breeze  whisker  22:42, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) - Tweak Nomination
File:Redtail.apprentice.png As far as I know, this never got completed, and to be safe, I wanted to re-nominate it so I didn't get accused of tweaking it out of turn... e.e Anyway, it needs a floofy tail....I'd liek it if it passes. 23:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * True. <span style="">02:15, 11, 06, 2012
 * Teh floof <3
 * 02:23 Mon Jun 11

Oakheart (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Oakheart.kit.alt.png The colour doesn't match his other bracken coloured alts, it looks like a paler version of his normal colour. o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 06:26, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * However, it needs to match the deputy, as the alt warrior is a tawny alt.
 * 22:36, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

00:52, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Nightwhisper ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Nightwhisper.warrior.png Pretty much the same case as Harveymoon's kittypet charart, the shading needs to be defined, and it almost seems to have no shading. Scarlet can have this if she would like. Comments? 04:28, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah a simple fix ^^  00:53, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 00:55, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">09:54, 12, 06, 2012

Tallpoppy (Alt. Q) - Redo Nomination
File:Tallpoppy.queen.alt.png I think the base coat should be the same as her other images just without stripes, and maybe without the cream chest/stomach, depending on what you guys think. Also, the earpink doesn't match, neither does the eye color, and the shading seems kind of flat and hard to see to me, I would like to do this please, if it passes. 04:08, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Agreed. May as well. Breeze  whisker  05:24, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Agreeing as well. 22:34, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * :3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  23:06, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sneezepaw ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Sneezepaw.kit.png, File:Sneezepaw.apprentice.png. The shade of gray on the kit doesn't quite match the apprentice, and there's hardly any shading. The apprentice needs it's shading defined, as I didn't even know there was any at first glance.
 * Definetely. 22:35, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 00:51, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * ^^ <span style="">09:27, 12, 06, 2012

Cody (KP) - Tweak Nomination
File:Cody.kittypet.png - Darken stripes to match queen. Stripes on forelegs don't match queen 00:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * The stripes on either image don't match each other. Might I also suggest smudging the stripes on the kittypet to match while you're at it?
 * I would personaly like the queen to be tweaked, but either could work. <span style="">01:44, 07, 06, 2012
 * Well, this is the one with the triangle stripes. Breeze  whisker  22:43, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

15:11, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Hailstar (A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Hailstar.apprentice.png The shading seems blotchy. I talked it over with Maplepool, and she said if it passes, I can do it. Comments? 07:45, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * True. <span style="">09:32, 12, 06, 2012
 * 17:34, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  13:07, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Snow (TB) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Snow.tb.png Shading could use definition. o3o I'd like this if it passes. 14:20, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * There's shading on that thing? o.o
 * I think there's a little on the hind leg. XD Breeze  whisker  02:34, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Might I remind you that that "thing" is someone's artwork. And that comment as well as the following comment can be taken offensively. Keep that in mind guys. 03:08, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * o.o <span style="">09:52, 14, 06, 2012

Mousefur (Alt. W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Mousefur.warrior.alt.png I want to redo the stripes before someone else claims they're unnatural, because there //is// the slightest hint of a y-tabby in them. Plus, as Loonie saw, I have quite an idea for this. You take, you risk my wrath. =P Go for it :D 18:57, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Breeze whisker  02:26, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Eh sure. <span style="">09:48, 14, 06, 2012

15:24, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Whitetail - Tweak Nomination
File:Whitetail.warrior.png File:Whitetail.queen.png File:Whitetail.apprentice.png Kay so we decided a while ago that thick fur isn't the same as long fur, and since she's WindClan she should still be short haired. So all the images need short hair lineart layered over them, and while the apprentice is up it could use darker shading. I'd like the apprentice, but the rest are up for grabs. 22:41, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Warrior's mine. I just re-did her image like...about a month ago, so I still have the .xcf
 * Could I have the queen? :3  01:00, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Breeze whisker  02:23, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) - Tweak Nomination
File:Rosepetal.warrior.png The image should be darkened to match her kit, apprentice, and her desc. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 19:16, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 19:18, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes. 19:21, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Mhm <span style="">09:04, 13, 06, 2012
 * Is it just me or do I remember something about these being tweaked to be lighter cause they looked brown or something? I think rthat was why the warrior was redone in the first place...-confused- <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers...  12:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * I seem to remember something like that too skt..... and the warrior was tweaked recently, I believe the apprentice and kit were supposed to be tweaked to match it. 22:24, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Since it is my image, I could always just tweak it to match the apprentice and kit. Looking at the apprentice and kit, they are dark cream, it's just that the old warrior wasn't. My mistake. I should have just made it to match those. Breeze  whisker  02:33, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, you could always do that if you want, I have no qualms  15:17, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Dawn River (SC) - Tweak Nomination
File:Dawn River.sc.png I feel that the shading could be darkened on it. If this passes I'd like it since I feel I could perfect my sharpclaw shading technique. 15:01, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Also, this looks like the artist just slapped a texture on top of the black. You might smudge around the ginger a bit, or whatever else to make the pattern more realistic. Breeze  whisker  15:14, June 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * Mmhmm. I also agree with what Breezey said.
 * 15:48 Fri Jun 15