Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 205

Tortoiseshell queen ~ Approved
soo, this is my first project here, I hope you like it :) 18:59, January 31, 2019 (UTC)

This is good! ^^ Remove the white, or change it to a cream color. The project defines a tortoiseshell as just black/orange, and only if they are described as 'tortoiseshell and white' do we add white.

hii add/define some earpink if you would, other images would show good colors for it. bumped this to ‘for approval’ since you know what you’re doing and welcome friend :3

Re-uploadedI hope it's okay for you like this 21:07, January 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and although this is common with the queen blanks she looks slightly cross-eyedPotato=) (talk) 22:53, January 31, 2019 (UTC)

Do you think you could add more patches? 08:07, February 1, 2019 (UTC)

I noticed your talk page comment, defining shading means to make it darker or visiblePotato=) (talk) 14:08, February 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:11, February 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Not breaking CBA but there's some waste outside --> that earPotato=) (talk) 23:11, February 1, 2019 (UTC)

yikes i hate breaking the cba on such a beautiful image but could you make it so that the black patches blend in more? right now they kind of look like they are pasted onto the image 05:07, February 2, 2019 (UTC)

it was so minor that I didnt think it was worth breaking CBA for, but because CBA is broken, is the front ← supost to look black?❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:33, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Re-uploaded I was on vacation, that's why it took so long, I hope I did everything right. I have tried the one with the stains, otherwise you may turn to me with pleasure and show me a trick how it would look better :) 12:25, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Approved

Tallstar (KP) ~ Approved
i put a collar on him since I can't seem to find a cite that said he didn't have one. Yes, I know the shading needs darkened, I'll do that on my next upload. 05:29, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

considering he was a feral cat at the vet and would highly object to wearing one, as well as no one making any kind of deal or notice that he was wearing one, he really shouldn't have it, especially as a main pov. his tail also needs to be longer. 05:32, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

pawpads and tongue unfilled

Make the tail loonnnnngerrrr Potato=) (talk) 05:35, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Nope Skt beat me to itPotato=) (talk) 05:39, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah but we don't necessarily know if he was wearing one or not. I'll remove it if I have to but I added it because the collar had no cite if he had one or not. I even read the chapters he was a kittypet while doing this. 16:05, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Not that I wrote the book or anything, but I definitely think that he would have noticed if he had a collar on him, so I agree with Trolly about removing it. 17:16, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the collar; if he had one, there's no way he wouldn't have pointed it out. Plus, he wasn't owned by these Twolegs, they were just taking care of him. There's no reason for him to have the collar. ​​​

can you fill in the paw pads and the tongue? especially the tongue, not sure if pawpads can be white 05:36, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

^ DOn't think so? Cats generally have black/brown/pink paw pads. Also I think the nose is unfilled too. —

Yeah, I'm removing the collar and the filling in the stuff but I think Spook pointed those out earlier. 13:19, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

oh im dumb lol yeah sorry splook for repeating 13:31, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-ups, re-did the shading because I lazed through the first. That shading took all day lmao my motivation was low 03:31, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Brighten some of the white on the front of the face? 19:39, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

It's at 100%, that's just shading. I've seen shading at that opacity on white, it should be fine? I tried to have some of the white show brighter but the white was low on his face where the shaidng is suppose to be. 20:49, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think the white on the face is fine as is. Very well done Mel 21:46, 02/5/2019

Maybe define the light on it or erase some of the shading so the white is more visible. 22:19, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups 23:58, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the tail could be quite a bit longer. it is what hes named for. 00:08, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

I tried to match his other images, they seem to be about an inch longer. 00:11, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

talk could be longer, look how long the tail is compared to the other unedited blanks for his other ranks 00:28, 02/6/2019

Waste outside the big ear and few specks of black around the longer tailPotato=) (talk) 01:29, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you erase some shading/texutre on the paws so that it looks white?

The collar shading still seems to be there. —

The collar isn't there, I removed it. There isn't texture on the paws, the shading only covers the bottom part of the paws? It gives it a light grey tone with how its done. I can screenshot how much the shading covers and its not very much. If I erase it, someone will then ask me to define it since I only have like half an inch of the paws in shading. Could I possibly get a second on that? 12:02, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

i think the front two paws should definitely be whitened 12:07, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups 23:19, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Whatever the gray lines are on the paws (shading or texture), could you lessen them? the white paws still look gray, especially compared to his other images

It's the textured shading, if I lessen it I'll be asked to darken it again. I think it looks fine especially since everyone has their own shading style. You can tell their white since I erased the shading on the top parts if the paws. Second opinion please? 19:14, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Fox, some of the lines should be lessened and the paws should be whitened more. 19:50, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups 00:25, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

There's a touch of white leaking out of the chin here, and the white is leaking away from the lineart on the bottom of the belly a little

Re-Ups 02:07, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved