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Stonestar (Le)~Declined
Don't tell me my art looks like Owl's because they showed me how to do cat art, so I adapted to their style, and first- first cat art I have ''posted! ''Axolotls are fudge (talk) 19:59, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Please recede the shading. It it making him dark. Ax, you did a great job on this, but just fix up the shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:02, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the deputy image, which means the eye color and base color need to be altered

Could you also expand the pupil? It's very hard to see. 20:30, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I can't tell if the shading is good. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 00:49, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

this is nice for your first! blur the edges of the shading to smooth it out 01:09, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

The pupils are overblurred, please sharpen them. The earpink could use a lot of definition, and adding on to Burnt's comment, I think the shading should be lightened 5-6 ticks on the opacity bar.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:43, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the pupils are not blurred at all, they never were, but I hope this helps! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 02:39, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Err.. it doesn't appear you changed anything. Did you upload the right file? If not feel free to slap me.Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:04, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws, muzzle and I'd suggest removing a bit from the top of the head the left side of the neck and a little on the chest too. Add a white dot of light in his eyes. 04:00, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

I see a difference, the eye changed, and the earpink on the → ear is different. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:35, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Add some eye white. And the eyes do look really blurry, perhaps sharpen the color.

Patch already mentioned the white! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:58, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't notice.

There is also some shading leaking away from the lineart by the --> front leg. 15:57, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Add more light to the right ear? (Also, the comment you added at first is very, very unnecessary.)--' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 13:10, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

I dont get what you mean by the comment I added first. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 20:23, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

your comment when you first posted this, and i agree it was unnecessary

what does that has to do with the art? Why did that need to be pointed out? Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  22:11, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

"Don't tell me my art looks like Owl's because they showed me how to do cat art" This is what they are talking about. This can come off as rude to others. Anyways, define the earpink in > this ear.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:00, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, OWO that was ment to be a joke! Sorry! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:38, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please lighten the shading another 5 ticks on the opacity bar (or however what program allows you to adjust shading.) The pupils are overblurred, maybe try the sharpen tool at a rate of 6 or seven with a medium brush. And I cannot make out any earpink, darken it a few ticks.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:33, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, it is hard to sharpen things that were never blurred, but I just re-did the eyes. and the ear pink, cannot be made any more visible now. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 02:43, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

lessen the shading on the ear, that might be the problem

Define the eye depth, there's waste near the --> ear and <--- paws (blue), and leaking shading on the belly, <--- foreleg, <--- haunch and base of the tail (red) 23:24, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading depth and smooth out the shading? 00:21, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-done, I didn't like it before, and it was hard to do with like... 20 almost useless layers, I'll lighten it up though! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:01, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, lightened by a bit. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:03, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking away from the base of the tail, and on the blanks right haunch and foreleg. 14:13, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also be smoothed out a little more on the right haunch. 01:01, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

the left haunch's shading is leaking a lil by the paw  Whiskii  ✿ 14:05, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Expanding on to Ivybreeze's comment, the shading could be smoothed everywhere. 23:04, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, can I do shading on this that I like? I dont think so! Axolotls are my children!  01:57, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 02:36, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, especially around the muzzle and forehead 08:28, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the eye color a bit more vibrant looks glazedWillowstep21 (talk) 20:37, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I like the eyes a little better now. program crashed, so it might have lost some of my work. Axolotls are my children!  21:38, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

The nose looks unfilled, and the eyes still look blurry. Perhaps add a definite gradient with a defined light source?

Might erase some shading on the <- side of the <- front leg. Otherwise, this is looking great Ax! 1:39 Mon Mar 4 2019

While you still have plenty of time, are you still working? 02:27, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

im still working. Ill re-up soon! Axolotls are my children!  03:22, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due exceeding the 10 day reupload time. 00:54, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

aw rip :/ Axolotls are  my children!  06:31, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Shnuky (KP) ~ For Approval
blurred shading is hard wth

Shunky is mentioned to be dark, and this is rather light...Potato&#61;) (talk) 14:12, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

...this was the color i put when i was tweaking this and no one said anything when i tweaked it? I'll darken it if you want but ???

i kind of agree with potato that it should be darkened– she does look more neutral to me 14:35, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

i thought shnulkyś collar was black--Willowstep21 (talk) 20:31, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

We cannot tell precisely if her collar is black, but it has to match what it looks like in TaS. So, the flower ribbon has to be removed. Shnuky is not seen on the cover, which doesn't confirm her collar color unlike Sasha's collar. Judging from the picture, it looks dark, so the collar has to be dark.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:06, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

but shouldnt the collar match the manga image Willowstep21 (talk) 19:53, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Willowstep, that's what I was talking about up there.^^Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:44, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

i'll need a picture of her so i know what to put

Here you go!Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:34, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Also, fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue and the shading tint is making her look green.. so maybe change the tint to a blue or purple?Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:54, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading tint is artist's choice, Star does not have to change it if she doesn't want to. ​​​​​

will upload after this but a, i'm not changing the tint, and b, is that even a paw pad? might be something else

aight so i was doing stuff and that image you linked potato? that doesn't seem dark, seems more neutral. i will change the collar but the base color i am not sure about.

Hmm perhaps color pick the image’s base? Also the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the shoulder^^ Ik shading tint is artists choice but it really clashes with the earpink in particular, could you dull it just on that perhaps?

re-up your wish is my command

could you define the depth? love the shading color 00:38, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The pink is leaking from the paw pads on the back paws -- 20:11, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

can you define either the shading or light on the collar? its just flat rn I need to try green shading   17:33, 02/23/2019

Still working?

re-up

eggheart i don't see any leaking pink can you point it out?

If you zoom in on > this leg, it is leaking. Fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue. 04:26, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

will reup later, but potato are you sure that is a paw pad? for all we know that could be a dew claw. I want a second opinion because rn i'm not sure what that is.

i think its supposed to be the dewclaw 10:47, 2/28/2019

think what egg meant by leaking pink was that there would be some parts not filled in all the way on the back paws, the spaces between the pawpaws, but they're all pink here

re-up ya girl did a dumb

CBA?

it brings me pain to break CBA, but I think there is some leaking shading(blue), pad pink out of the pad(red)here you go. and the pad closest to the toung, everyone else had to fill in, and I think it should be fair you should too, and while you are at it, could you fill in the nose? Could you lastly, define the shading on the toung? Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  20:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Snowdrop (Kittypet) - For Approval
i like to shade white cats Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 20:35, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Very pretty! :D Can you define the light on ---> ear? 20:40, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Squidward Plays All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:45, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

add shading depth?

Still working? 23:36, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, I'm gonna re-up tonight <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups an attempt was made <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Where is your light source? <span style="">1:37 Mon Mar 4 2019

Looks like its coming from --> side Malina457 (talk) 02:04, March 5, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Can you define the light on the legs 17:01, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:21, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (Kittypet) - For Approval
his name is cool <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:39, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Would the scar be showing at this angle? 22:47, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think his kittypet image is supposed to get the scar, or does it? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:38, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

It would probably show a little on his belly, judging by the deputy. 01:06, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Doesn't he get the scar after he joins SkyClan? I know it would be visible, but I won't add it unless someone can tell me he had his scar while he was a kittypet, Sorry Potato. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:43, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

oh my, I totally forgot he was a KP before joining. Okay then, don't add it bc *facepaw* I'm dumb. Shading could be smoothed on the belly and collar. 02:39, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

awwwww, pink kittypet :3 Willowstep21 (talk) 13:48, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Please do not comment unless you have a critique; it clogs up the page. ^^ 14:10, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:09, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reups this as smooth as i can get it <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:23, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm could you make the transitions from gray to white match moreso what is on the deputy? Here, they seem more "smudgey" for lack of better words, where on the other they are smudged, but not so back and forth and less transition space

Old warrior/deputy smudge effect was achieved by making the pattern with a hard edge and smudging with a 1 px brush. <span style="">1:36 Mon Mar 4 2019

Still working? 00:55, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Am still working, goin to reup ntomorrow afternoon, if thats ok <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:24, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Myler (KP) ~ For Approval
Based him off my own pretty kitty :) and Spooky told me to add a bowtie so I hope that worked out 00:46, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading and define it on the white please 06:58, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The paw pads are also multicolored, when they should be just one. 15:05, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Not necessarily, paw pads are artists choice Malina457 (talk) 15:35, March 2, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded Think I fixed shading, and BTW I based the pawpads off my kitty :) 04:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading slightly on the collar? 04:31, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading on the flank a bit.

01:23, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah, sorry, I've been busy all week and haven't had time to get on the computer. After my band assessment today I should have time. Wish me luck! 17:36, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Straight superiors! Also, I'm sorry, I can never see what I'm doing with black cats 04:12, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading on the leg nearest to the belly? the shading looks super rough. great job! ^^ -- 07:47, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded better-ish...? I couldn't really make the shading there cooperate 18:13, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Elder blanks - For Approval
aaa ty all so much!!!! Whiskii ✿ 02:49, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe that the heads are just very slightly too big (from reference images, it seems like a cats body is around 2 (2/3) heads) 03:02, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the nose bridge a bit - like this. 12:22, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. with the way the <-- whiskera are pointed would the --> left ones show? I adore these 12:30, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Might be my personal problem but could you make the smile a little less connected to the whiskers/less...noticeable? I love a smile and a small one is cute but this one seems overly large for a cat. Idk. These are really good though! 19:39, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with what winter said about the smile– i also think it would be more in character if it were lessened 03:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hows this look? blanks are hard!! Whiskii ✿

hm, it still looks as though the whiskers/mouth are touching maybe curve the mouth down a tad instead of up? 15:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Are changes showing?

last nitpick– the long hair tail's seems to lie unnaturally flat, could you maybe add more fur lines there? i love these so much 15:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is optional; but maybe since they are elders add little lines under their eyes to make them seem older?

15:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mind checking for a few darker gray lineart pixels that aren't quite black? There's a few scattered around on it

i think wiki's having a problem rn or somethin because the changes arent showing, ill get to theother comments in a sec  Whiskii  ✿ 16:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded are the changes finally showing? also i tried putting a line under their eyes but it blended too much with the whiskers. i may still add it if you really want to  Whiskii  ✿ 17:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the blanks could benefit from a line under the eyes - just to make them look older. 18:07, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I also just wanted to point out the longhair's tail is like that because its supposed to be flat on the ground ^-^  Whiskii  ✿ 18:40, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I mean they look fine without the line imo 20:27, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed; the line might make it too crowded. 22:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tried something out, thoughts? Whiskii ✿ 22:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I think these look great! 02:25, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Personally I think the lines around the eyes (both on the left side and near the snout) should be removed. Cats don't really have any sort of creasing in those two spots no matter what age, so it doesn't make much sense for them to be there. The shoulders are also too defined, especially on the longhair, and the tail curve is a bit unnatural right now. Also, I don't have the time to draw a test lineart tweak to check, but have you made sure that the haunch area looks good when the tail is removed? Cause that was a slight problem on the old versions, and even on the kit blanks I had to completely redo the haunch after I realized it looked weird when they were used for a short-tailed/tailless character. If you've already checked and made sure it looks fine like that, you can ignore this bit of the comment.

reuploaded removed the eye lines, made the shorthair's tail better, kept the longhair's tail as is, because i cant really do much else with it, removed most of the shoulder line. also the haunch area looks fine when tail is removed, you just have to draw it in correctly  Whiskii  ✿

changes arent showing on the shorthair :(  Whiskii  ✿

reuploaded there was waste around the image? o.O also i think its working now! changes are showing! Whiskii ✿ 15:09, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

now the changes for the waste arent showing -.-  Whiskii  ✿ 15:10, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hopefully this fixes it  Whiskii  ✿ 23:13, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure but on the shorthair, I think the ears need to be brought forward so the neck curves naturally into the head - something like this?  16:13, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

I looked at some images of cats in this position and their backs appear more arched and their shoulders are not really visible;, , as a reference. Could you also make the body longer? They look a bit short right now. 20:17, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna give a redline on this when I get some more free time later, but I did wanna point out that it's not clear if this pose is supposed to be the kind of bunched up pose that patch linked, or a more relaxed pancake-y pose like this. Either way the spine is two short right now, but whether you lengthen the entire body a lot and keep the arch roughly the same or lengthen it just a bit and make the arch much more pronounced, that's kinda up to your interpretation of the pose (though yes, please do remove the shoulder lines, they're not visible in either case).

Black and white kittypet- For Evaluation
Not sure how I feel about this.. also I know about the thumb thing yet I can't remove it.. help?-- 01:53, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

there is waste all around the image, thr shading is leakinf all around and It could also be expanded. It also appears that the earpink on the ear is leaking away from the linearrt. Th black patch on the tail could also be softnened. Malina457 (talk) 04:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

I know.. let me see what I can do with Photoshop, mystery person. 02:00, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

are you using layers? because ive noticed that the black patches are leaking from the linear art. try putting the linear art on another layer and leaving the black on the layer below. 02:50, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Yep, I do use layers. Do you want me to set them to multiply? 03:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

no, you dont need to set it to multiply. for the waste, tbh just go to the appropriate layer and erase it. also, i recommend using a 10 px smudge tool on 40% strength to smooth out the shading. 03:20, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ugh I'll mess with it later. 03:23, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

like basically apply the smudge tool for the edges of the shading by moving it in a motion perpendicular to the shading edges (ok that sounds. extremely like flux and gauss's law ew). i find this easier than the blur tool, which generally sucks 03:22, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Coukd you smooth the shading and it expand it. Could you also darken the earpink a tad, it seems really neon. 03:29, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the shoulder, chest, and stomach. 04:33, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded did I upload the right file? 04:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

there is stil waste Malina457 (talk) 04:47, March 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

Ack, whenever I overwrite the existing filename, no changes show... 05:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Wait I may have figured it out.. 05:04, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded yes there we go. Better? 05:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again more things, will get the waste in a second. Suggestions? 05:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

the shading needs smoothing out in general– namely on the shoulder. also, could you tone down the color of the paw pads? its slightly neon. 05:25, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ye I'll get to that 05:30, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo it tomorrow, since I don't like how it currently is. I also lost all my layers, which is another reason I'm redoing it. 05:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes are not showing. I tinted the shading and I'm well aware it needs to be smoothed out. Also there is waste outside the tail, but I can't erase it due to the way Photoshop crops the image. 16:10, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Wait they are popping up but this is still showing.. help? 16:24, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Look here for changes. 17:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

it’s showing up now i think. anyways, there is a lot of waste by the tail, there needs to be more shading where the front leg and stomach meet. Also can you smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us and darken it a bit, it looks a bit too purple to be shading.

17:48, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

It's not showing up for me. Ari, I can't kill the waste due to the way Photoshop displays the image, but I can try with magic powers. I knew the shading had to be smoothed a bit.. let me do that. 19:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded tried fixing things, will kill that waste. 19:52, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

KERBLAM yay changes are showing. This better? Also, Photoshop let me kill the waste *happy dance*! 19:56, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twas more played with far front leg shading. Smudging is fun. 20:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

More wasted has been killed  20:10, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the tint of the shading, or perhaps put it into multiply? 20:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded did both. Better? 21:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Minor Tweaks  22:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

this is looking better! could you darken the shading so that it looks less saturated? 22:53, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is getting better! I think colour on the pawpads and ears are leaking away from the lineart though? 22:56, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded that's just lighter pink Finches. I will get to the shading now. 00:26, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:34, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, and smooth out the shading everywhere.

darken the shading tint a lil- it still looks neon 08:42, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

looks very flat  define shading?Willowstep21 (talk) 20:16, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:23, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears neon, could you make it a bit less saturated? Define the lightsource as well. 00:30, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm.. the light is coming from the right, so some shading will have to be swapped I guess. Will desaturate shading now. 00:36, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you also blur the shading in the ear a little bit? <span style="">00:38 Tue Mar 5

Reuploaded redid the shading to fit lightsource, also desaturated it. Better? 00:53, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Also, the shading looks blocky, any Photoshop advice on how to fix that? 00:57, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Use the blur tool at about, I'd say maybe 50%, and go around the edges of your shading and see what it does. I use CS5, and the tools are a lot more powerful than GIMP or Pixlr's are. Also, you've got waste on <-- side of the tail on the outside of the lineart. ;)

Winterwhisper, was that you? I'll get on to that. 01:38, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Nope, it was me. Forgot to sign, sorry about that. ​

It didn't do much.. but I see more waste so I'll nam that 01:48, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurring did not do much. I did nab ear waste, but Jayce Photoshop will not let me kill the tail waste. I tried on two layers and it will not leave. 01:53, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Try upping the strength of the blur tool. I'm not sure about the waste issue, try deselecting before you attempt to erase.

Reuploaded set blur to 80 percent and it didn't do much. Also, I don't select anything and tail waste is still there.. suggestions? 22:38, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Waste has died  22:54, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

i still recommend the smudge tool at 10 px and 40% strength, it achieves the same effect as the blur tool  00:14, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded did not do much. Also, shading is not leaking away from the lineart on the front leg closest to us, that's just light shading. Any more suggestions? This smudge tool hates me holy shrimp 02:40, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

i HATE suggesting this, because its a rly bad method, but try gaussian blur if nothing works and set the strength to as you see fit. 14:29, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

the front leg/arm shadong is on the faceWillowstep21 (talk) 20:31, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

What's a shadong? XD. That's facial shading but I can remove it if another agrees. I'm gonna play with GB so reup soon. 22:39, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

I did not find a Gaussian Blur on my Blurtool settings. Tried blurring again, nothing. But I refuse to give up yet so any suggestions? 22:50, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

You could try using a darker tint of blue or purple as well as using a smaller brush to help with it, I normally smudge with how the fur goes first then blur what needs to be blurred. 22:52, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

If you're using Photoshop; it should be under Filter>Blur>Gaussian Blur - another tip I can pass on is using clipping layers to have no waste (the keyboard shortcut should be ctrl + alt + g :D 22:54 Wed Mar 6 2019

Reuploaded omg this is so much better Gaussian Blur saved me 23:40, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to the stomach <-, smooth out the shading more.

Reuploaded  23:20, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

this is coming along very nicely! expand the shading some on the belly, then smooth it out. do this on a different layer so that your reapplication of gaussian blur does not affect the other shading that you've already done. 23:26, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Ty! Also Gaussian Blur has not been affecting my shading, surprisingly. Will reup soon. 00:21, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:29, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the legs and belly and could be smoothed more. I believe the shading on the hind leg closest to us should be expanded up to the tail, and perhaps expand some up to the shoulder as well? 00:52, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:11, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink looks overblurred or just pulling up, maybe fill it in more? This is going great^^ --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 14:01, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'm really sorry for the double comment but could you smooth all the legs' shading? the belly shading is pulling up the same way as the earpink, still looks great ^^ --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 14:03, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Please elaborate on the earpink part I'm so confused rn. 22:31, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Silver, your signature is acting weird and causing source mode to appear. I cannot smooth the shading out in those locations anymore, or I'll be told to define it. And I redid the earpink anyway. Better?-- 22:57, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

It is possible to smooth it more to make it appear more gradient. If the shading looks too flat, you can make another darker layer of shading to give it more depth. For areas that need smoothing, belly, front legs, shoulder, tail tip, and top of the hind leg leg closest to us. Could you also expand the shading more on that leg and on the head? Might be a personal preference of mine, but the earpink appears a bit too dark and red in color. Could you lighten and make it more pink? 00:43, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:09, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

the shading still needs smoothing out everywhere– once again i recommend using a 5-10px round smudge tool and move it in a fashion perpendicular to the edge of the shading. 07:59, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I cannot do anything more with the belly, because the smudge tool isn't working on that layer (I have all my shading on separate layers, fyi). I honestly tried. Thoughts and suggestions?-- 15:05, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Jake (kp) ~ for approval


01:28, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

would you like the file? 01:37, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

i already have the file from patch, but thank you for the offer!

01:39, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

It looks like the loner and rogue have more stripes, closer together. <span style="">1:42 Mon Mar 4 2019

The stripes also appear darker and have jagged edges. 01:57, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'd just like to say that the loner and rogue didn't have the master pattern, the old kittypet did. Just because the images are being redone doesn't mean the old images weren't required to match it. ​​​​​

Obviously optional, but how does it look if you lighten the shading or change the tint? The shading to me sort of clashes with the bright ginger.

^i think its especially true given the style of shading. 12:30, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tint is fine honestly, I'm not seeing where its clashing but it could be smoothened and lightened just a tad 13:51, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

14:19, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the line where the belly meets the hind legs? Also, not sure if this is valid, but his eyes look almost white. Would it be possible to darken/saturate them a bit while still matching the rogue and loner? Maybe like the old kittypet  20:49, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

His eyes are blue, FYI. 00:35, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded not sure what you meant by that, but he's cited with green eyes.

00:53, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Eyes are green, wiki just makes it look white Malina457 (talk) 01:56, March 5, 2019 (UTC)malina

Yeah, every now and again, the wiki will have colors appear washed out...we're not totally sure why it does this. ​​

Add a shading stripe or two right next to the belly fat lineart. It makes it look like it's leaking. 02:34, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

the shading on the belly seems blotchy

The tail needs stripes, judging from his other images. 02:46, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the over all shading depth a little? I've also noticed that with this shading style, if it's lacking depth you can make another layer of normal untextured shading and smooth out the edges with the smudge tool. I've started doing it recently, saves a lot of time and looks good! 00:36, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Brown StarClan elder ~ CBA
i know the ear pink looks off, i'll tweak that soon 21:22, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Make the entire image brown. This StarClan elder does not have a gray tail, and that was in reference to Goosekit, not the StarClan cat. ​​

Re-Ups, I really liked the gray lol 21:51, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail and face. ​​

She looks a little green... 00:02, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

She isn't green lmao the shading is black and she's brown. It must be your screen. 00:29, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

That was a fair bit rude, Mink. I agree with Potato, this image does look quite a bit green. =\ ​

It wasn't meant to come off rude, I was simply stating that some screens give them a colored tint. I'm not seeing how she's green? There us no green on except her eyes. 04:34, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

She looks green on my screen as well. Multiple people have asked you to change it and that can't be a coincidence across screens. Saturate the color, or colorpick elsewhere.

Re-Ups, I wasn't gonna not fix it. But it should be fixed now 17:17, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

What direction is your light coming from? I may be mistaken, but the flank, tail and front legs tell me different. 02:48, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

It's coming from the left but a bit above. I used the same source on Spikefur and Sorreltail as this as I used the same shading from Sorreltail and tweaked it. 02:56, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

If that's the case, I think the shading on the tail should be lessened.

Re-Ups 15:57, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

correct me if i'm wrong but if the light is coming from the <- there shouldnt be shading on the our left side of her face? -- 09:06, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Its not coming from the left side its coming from above and a little to the -->. I've used the shading source on my rwo others and it's been fine. 15:44, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

hmm CBA? 02:56, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt Le 3) - For Approval
I have attempted a semi solid character... 23:02, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripe should be a tad thinner to match Silverstream and Feathertail's alts. 01:58, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing friend! (If I can call you that!), But would you mind smoothing the tail shading? The earpink could also be defined a bit imo. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 13:12, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! (You can call me that :D) 13:50, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

hmm not a comment on the image itself but why was this readded to the needed list? might be missing something, but this wasn't in use prior to us removing all the leaders from the pages

I thought it was needed since Silverstream also has it on her page? Am I missing something?

I'm v sure she'd get this image since its in her trivia/mistakes. 07:49, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Do we even know if the one with the headstripe is Bluestar? There are at least two cats it could be, and the manga never specifies which one is Bluestar. Aren't we just assuming that she's shown with a headstripe? 22:06, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Well if this stays up.. Sharpen the stripe to match Silverstream and Feathertail's alts. I think whoever made those used a hard-edged brush. Also, define the light on the paws. 02:50, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 22:30, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Light-colored and white rogue (Ro) ~ CBA
Comments? 22:09, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading it seems real rough/hard on the haunch and shoulder areas especially. 00:08, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I may just redo the shading. 00:29, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the white? 00:37, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Actually define the shading everywhere or add depth. I'm hardly seeing it at all. 00:48, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the shading on the gray just not the white but defining it wouldn't hurt tbh 00:49, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the overall shading could be defined, and I'm actually wondering if it's possible for you to smudge/blur the transition between the white and the lighter gray? It seems a bit too hard-edged right now. ​​​​​

Reuploaded. 03:39, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

can you blue the transition between the gray and whiteWillowstep21 (talk) 17:40, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

I only agree that it can be blurred on < this front leg and < that back leg. 22:56, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:05, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

sorry i meant blur not blue :(Willowstep21 (talk) 13:07, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 00:55, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Shanty (KP) - For Approval
tfw you can't even recreate your original design lol <span style="">23:44 Wed Mar 6

Is the nose filled in? Oh no tiny text *pokes Sun's siggie* 00:37, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

would you mind pinking up her paw pads a little bit? they look exactly the same as her fur <span style="">15:22, 03/7/2019

potato, the nose is filled in. --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 08:41, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

just wanna pop in and say paw pads dont necessarily have to always be pink, i have a cat with gray paw pads <span style="">12:32, 3/08/2019

I can see the paw pads distinct from the fur color -- 19:53, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

can you blur the back leg shading a lil bit? <span style="">00:11 Sat Mar 9

Mitzi (KP) (KP) ~ For Approval
05:06, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the lefmg and tail shading? 07:12, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the face could stand to be lessened given the light source

Re-uploaded. 16:58, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

that looks better than the attempted one ps. define the foreleg´s shadingWillowstep21 (talk) 17:39, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

That was rude, the other user worked hard on trying to match that.. 17:46, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Yep. Keep in mind Owl worked very hard on her (I'm his friend). Fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue or darken it slightly. Define the eye depth. 22:57, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That comment was unnecessary and disrespectful, Willow. Please remember you should be considerate of everyone's work in the future. 23:32, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

Given the light source, shouldn't there be shadow on -> this side of the haunch?

Re-uploaded. 03:47, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

the eyes need to be yellow, there was a smoother change between all the colors, and the darker brown is too dark, the head stripe is to wide to! Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  04:08, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Smoothed the patches a tiny bit and put a little bit of white at the top of corners of he eyes. The eyes are yellow and the darker patches were color picked from the queen. 04:26, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

hey Patch, I think the dark is a little off, color picking doesn't remove shading, so it would be lighter. Maybe ask Ari for the file? Axolotls are my children!  03:26, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

I picked it in a spot where there was no shading. It matches her queen. 03:31, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Bracken-colored WindClan Apprentice (A) - For Approval
- really hope i named that right 06:43, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's named right^^ Can you smooth the haunch shading?

Define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 23:13, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:05, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Leafstar (L) - For Approval
Sorry for the delay on this. Whoever made this pattern is a freaking idiot, it literally took me like 5 hours to finish this image.

Could you add some shading to the nose? -- 19:48, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

hm I believe she needs mottles 01:49, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think she has a scar on her chest. -- John made it. He’s the only one. Rest of us… no.  But… I tried. In the end. I did.  03:59, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

She does have a scar. Either Paleh forgot to add it, or it's under the shading and could be defined. Still, marvelous job! 04:33, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yew (KP) ~ CBA
My next cat will be named Yew. 16:54, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Mangy tabby (Ro) - For Approval
ehhh. <span style="">17:43, 03/8/2019

There is waste near the ears, under the tail near the booty, the paws, and the belly. 20:56, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Henry (KP) ~ For Approval
Oh well, I know he isn't listed on the charat list, but we have a name, and we have a description, so why wouldn't he get a design? And also since we can make tabbies whatever color that we want I made him sort of bracken colored! Axolotls are my children!  03:30, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

didn't david claim this already? -- 04:11, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yep, it's David's claim. 04:12, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad! It isn't on the reservation table so I didn't know :P  Axolotls are my children!  05:00, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yeah, their the OA so they'd get first claim. It's all good though. 05:06, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

you can keep it man. I don't think I really want it anyway 11:52, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Guess this will keep going, define light on back legs. -- 14:31, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is probably personal preference but can you make the stripes a little less curly? 18:28, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups! Any better? Axolotls are my children!  22:31, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

The light is great on the back legs! define the shading a lil more on the paw nearest to the tongue? this is pretty ^^ -- 02:10, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Dark-colored StarClan cat (Star) ~ For Approval
Well that's a lot of typing in the heading... I apologize now if this is named incorrectly 04:45, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Not bad! Blur the pale chest into the fur a bit more, as well as smudging the fur into the earpink (thought it is your preference). 04:48, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading please. --<span title="vision kinda blurry, whatchu call that? i don&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' t light the blunt too hot" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=vision kinda blurry, whatchu call that?&#10;i don't light the blunt too hot"&gt; silv  <span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt;  seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar   04:59, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly darken the gray a bit to be a darker gray as with the light it doesn't seem like a dark color cat. 05:09, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a touch. I would reccomend 2-3 clicks with the burn tool and that should do the trick. 15:53, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Kitty 18:23, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, there needn't be any shading on the back^^

Define the eye depth. 19:18, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Splash (KP) (KP) ~ For Approval
figured i'd finish him. -- 08:37, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading as well as the light on the legs. 18:26, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

reups -- 05:43, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

SE-6 White StarClan Cat (star) ~ For Approval
Patch has gave me permission to do this and finish this up.-- 02:47, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading and define the --> eye depth 02:54, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reups -- 03:25, March 10, 2019 (UTC)