Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Pearnose (MC) ~ Tweaked
ready for round two? 01:08, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

should have said this before but the pale parts are far too blurred and dont blend in as well as they did in the original. 08:39, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i try all the tiime 01:55, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

idk but it seems too hardedged. Maybe smudge it a bit more? 06:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you... lighten the herbs and perhaps define light on them? yummy dark-seaweed

The herbs don't need to be lightened. Herbs can be any different color. 20:19, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Sunnytail (D) - Redone
spitting in younger me's face w/this new and improved ray of sunshine (:  22:09, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Idk if it's just me or if her shoulder shading is a bit... off?? I mean that always happens to me so idk me no like this black lines

Smooth out the shading, i can see the smudge marks. 05:54, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

The shoulder shading looks fine. 21:32, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw that is lifted up 09:49, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Frost (Ro) ~ Tweaked
shadin 21:55, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Can you thin out the shading on the face a little if you get what I mean 21:58, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded shut the hell your mouth   15:24, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? 19:10, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

im trying to define it.....and its not very dark. 17:41, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

smooth it out on the haunch, please. 06:49, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

'''reuploaded' 11:48, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) ~ Redone
Round 2 05:14, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. So brambleclaw's warrior doesn't really go down and rise again. It's basically straight. Can you fix that? 13:13, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Thin the stripes a little and define the pale bit on the tail? 19:08, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

@Appledash, could u clarify, please? 05:30, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Ok so his chest is basically like goes down to the neck, and rises from the chest. On Brambleclaw's warriors, it's a straight line, and doesn't rise. I'm horrible at explaining tbh. 11:39, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (L) ~ Tweaked
05:18, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

can you smudge the tail shading? 06:59, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

no, blur it  smooth out the shading where the gap between the two arms as well

reuploaded 22:57, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Make the shading sharper, and define it on the shoulder and forehead. Also, lighten it on the base of the tail, and thicken the shadnig out. It looks too thin right now. 01:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded im not making it sharper.....people will just tell me to smudge it again. and this shading is nearly the exact same as the shading from the previous version, AND its around the same as runningnoses. no one had problems with those. and the tail shading is the exact same shade as the rest. 11:44, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Miststar (D) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Sandstar, Paleclaw, Shelly, and StormSongz. Tweaked to be lighter. When I changed the color the shading all but disapeared, and so I had to redo it. Ugh, this is terrible. 14:21, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add more depth to the shading and smooth it out. Also possibly thin it where it meets the midriff, and define it on the tail and all paws. 01:08, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  14:40, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more, please. 20:17, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  21:41, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA of the new blank was moi. I simply put the old colour back, but I also smoothed the shading on the belly, since it was that blocky type I used to do. 15:43, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Smooth / blur it. 01:08, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I actually personally think that the shading darkness and hardness is good as it is now. 09:47, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I have to agree with Icy.. but I think if she smooths it out a bit more, she wouldn't have to lighten it. The transition is a bit rough.

Mistystar (A) ~ Tweaked
Second try. Why did Mistykit even get declined???

I'm not sure, but since Burnt said you were a bit confused, it's alright. It's never really explicitly said in the guidelines, but it's two images on the tweak page as a time, and while you can reserve more than two on the nominations page, you can only post two and reserve two on the table.

Yea I know. It was just that I declined both this and warrior after hearing that, but then the kit got declined too, so I was confused. Stealth already made it clear that she made a mistake so it's been solved. I was just worried that I did something else wrong =P

Thistleclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
I totally ruined it. >< OA is Nightshine, Redone artist is Ivystripe and tweakers are Ashshadow and me. Tweaked tom match description. Many credit and thanks to Burntclaw for sending in the apprentice file, and that made my life much easier. :) 08:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white 08:56, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

K so I smudged my white patches with a 10 px bristle brush and i did not smudge or blur the texture- i used a paint brush and added dark and light tones to show the light hitting the fur and the shadows to give his fur a "bristling" effect. Nice image, anyway =) 09:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the texture on the white please. 09:12, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

why does he have white paws? hes only speicifed white and grey on his face and shoulders. 11:03, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

nvm, cite got found 12:06, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

He looks like hes still mottled, is that intentional? 22:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

That's texture. There is tabby stripes I promise, it's just harder to see because it's a tiny image. 23:01, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more please, with a hard edged one px brush 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload If I have to turn the internet upside down to get a better smudge tool >< 07:21, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) ~ Redone
oa's include bramble, mintstarr, shelly, silver, and jayce who was awesome enough to give me this and upload for me ;-; 11:06 Fri Oct 2

This should use the old linear art- it wasn't nominated for a linear tweak. Very pretty btw, maybe try erasing a little bit of the texture on the edge of the paws and the face so that it would look less grey. 11:36, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Jayce told me they didn't mind me using new lineart; I'll change it if you want it, but... 12:19 Fri Oct 2

idk but I was told to do it in the past... So... 12:20, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I literally don't care either way. Given that it's explicitly stated he was named after his spiky fur, I think the more spikyness, the better. I was going to say that on the other images, but the apprentice was archived before I got the chance.

Should I nominate the apprentice? 12:26, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

If you believe it should be, yes. I mean, given that ragged fur can change over time, I don't think you'd need to 30000% match Berry's style, but he could use more spiky fur. Anyways, Berry, could you define the ear pink? I actually didn't think he had any the first time I saw this.

Littlecloud (K) ~ Redone
*flails* OA was Skye. Redone to redo lol 00:18, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (DF) - Redone
Okay, so I may have slightly overdone the fluff. But I'm really happy with this. OA was me. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:26, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Waste on the back 03:30, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:37, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the white on the face, it looks grey. Smooth out the texture and shading on the shoulder. 03:42, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the fur tuffs more "spiky" like sharp ended? For now it's more like ragged than actually spiky.

Flowerpaw (Star) - Redone
OA is Stormsongz, redone to match. If Storm wants it, i will surrender this. 05:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you can change the eyes.

Every redone image of mine I had the eyes redone too...? 07:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ccccccrap bleh I thought this was tweaked omg sorry I'm just too dumb to even look

Um im sorry?????? This is still mine, it is still the third Storm  &#9835;  13:03, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

It's until the 3rd. You had all week to post it. 13:06, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I dont wanna be that person but dont you get the whole day it ends to have it until? Correct me if im wrong 13:07, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, no. That's only how some of us like to do it, like me. I do it to try and give the person the benefit of the doubt in thinking that they're busy, but it's not a rule in the project.

Mistystar (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Second try, tweaked to define shading

Thistleclaw (A) - Tweaked
He has Xanthe fur! 06:19, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Fluff up his butt and the base of histail a bit. It looks a bit weird to have it flat and then...poof. 06:37 Sat Oct 3