Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Lilykit (Alt K) - Tweaked
OA was Atelda and she needed her shading darkened. I just borrowed the shading off of Jayfeather's kit and blurred it some more :3 18:14, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

It just looks like she got darker... Maybe add a highlight? Or define the edges of the shading. I still can't really tell there is any. 18:39, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. 02:32, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. o.o 03:14, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Nah, Misty's right. It could be defined, but only a tad.

Lighten the shading under the head on <--- side. 23:51, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:25, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I remember my first image. :3 I will somehow finda way to smooth out that shading e.e OA was moi and needed defined shading and the image needed to be lightened. Comments? 22:53, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make his white a little more...white? xD I remember this image being put up for approval. o.o

Lighten the shading a tad. 23:52, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts? :3 When we were still apprentices... x3 23:54, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Woaaah. I remember when this was put up for approval too~ :D Blur the highlight/light patch on the chest. 05:24, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

8D Re-Ups^ 17:06, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

The white still looks gray and blur the shading a bit. 23:55, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lazy today. x3 15:35, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sunfish (Ki) - Tweaked
Eh, GOMP is being gompy. Anyways defined shading and darkened. OA was Specklestream. Comments? 03:04, 29, 07, 2012

Define the earpink and the unshaded spots. 17:35, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  09:23, 31, 07, 2012

Antpelt (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading and earpink. OA was me. Comments? 03:04, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the ear with the ear pink. =P

Define the shading on his haunch just a little more. 19:17, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (Ki) - Tweaked
Needed his collar removed. OA was Purplemoon. 17:35, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define and make the earpink bigger? 23:20, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

I don't have the .xcf so it's very hard to do. I personally think it looks totally fine, but if anyone disagrees then I'll do my best to change it. 01:42, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Splashheart (L) - Tweaked
Redid the shading. OA was me. 17:45, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you fill in the white pixel? 12:10, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

...Where? >.> 14:21, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

The one in between the front paws. Most longhaired leaders have it filled. 15:37, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

But it's not mandatory. I choose not to fill it in. 16:04, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (KP) ~ Tweaked
Although it looks redone, it really isn't. The shading needed major defining, and she needed to be pale gray, not white with weird shading. OA of the most recent version is Wildfire.

Blur the highlights on the haunches. Or at least lighten them. Cute too by the way :3 19:42, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If the changes aren't showing, look here.

darken the shading 16:09, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, but if anyone else asks, I shall. 8D

I think the shading should be defined than darkened: and dull the highlights a tad. 22:56, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the earpink a bit? 15:50, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Q) - Redone
OA was me (fun fact, this was my second ever approved image!) I am so glad I could kill this. I redid the stripes and the cream, and I tinted the shading, so hopefully it matches better. Oh, and the markings aren't as blurred as they were last time, though I think some of the stripes may need blurred more, not sure, gimmie your opinion. I hate stretching out stripes on queens ._. 18:00, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 8D 18:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty <3 Blur the earpink :3 19:47, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful! Define the shading a tad. 01:31, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so glad that you guys agree that this looks better :) 02:50, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

This is georgious. <3 Possibly make the shading more brown and for the sake of matching the other images, make the cream that's shaded... more creamy? oWo 09:14, 01, 08, 2012

The cream's fine. It's just shading... 09:59, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be pale gray and shading needed to be defined. OA was Goldencloud with tweaks made by Appledash and Wildfire. I don't know if I made her too dark or not, so yeah... And something weird happened with the earpink, so I'll fix that soon :P Comments? 20:02, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the eyes just a bit? They seem darker compared to her kittypet image.

Maybe blur the earpink a bit. 20:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

She already said she'd fix the ear pink, Bluestar. There's no need to remind her.

Lighten the shading. 22:55, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the haunch and belly "hightlight" into the pelt more. 14:15, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the eyes and the shading, fixed the earpink and blended the belly and haunch highlights,  16:01, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Ki) - Redone
This fails so much. ;.; Comments would be much appreciated...It had to be redone because it needed to be mottled. 23:59, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Just a preference but make her a tad more "blacker", define the earpink and add some more mottles and define them a bit. :3 09:18, 01, 08, 2012

Re-Uploaded. 14:33, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Alt. Kit) ~ Redone
Wow I really like this one. 8DDD I based the pattern off of Gorsetail's mottled alt, so I think we're good. OA was the amazing Leggy person, and she had to have her stripes redone and stuff. :3 Thanks to ivy for letting me have this one~ 03:31, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and make it more "mottled" instead of just dots? Maybe some lighter texture under the stripes? 03:48, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the color looks a bit off...she kind of looks black and white. Can you balance the color out? 05:03, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (W) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA is 'Teldy. Needed to have it's shading defined, and changed to pale gray. I also tweaked the eyes to match the kittypet. Colors are the same...but I'm not too fond of that shading.

Probably lighten the shading some and blend it a bit more (?). Also blur that shoulder-ish "highlight" :3 09:26, 01, 08, 2012