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Needletail (Star) ~ CBA
ew x100000

20:29, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

This is awesome, dude. Hm. I think the tail shading is a bit blotchy, and, I don't know, she looks a bit lighter than her other images? It might be how you made the texture, though.^^ 20:38, 6/13/2018

Could you make the texture a bit rougher, for lack of a better word? The apprentice is the first in this set, and most of the texture on her other images don't really match what I had. (  20:39, 6/13/2018  ) ​

Thanks Broken ^^ So I made the pelt lighter by a shade or two and I redid the tail shading and texture, hopefully it looks slightly better.

20:49, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

define the white chest? 21:23, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Soften the shading on the flank and tail a bit? It's looking blotchy to my eyes. Nice job. 21:34, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd for the unknown resident image? The colors for her stuff are a little tricky because of the texture. 21:36 Wed Jun 13

Can you add a little shading to line the bottom of the chest? Just a tad, but there would be some there because of how the light is

Sun, that would be amazing. I'll shoot you my email on your talk page. Once I get the file I'll update guys. ^^

23:10, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

I wouldn't say they're tricky, but I would again like to stress that the apprentice is the first in this image, so all others should match that one. I still have the file for the apprentice if you want that one as well. (  10:58, 6/14/2018  ) ​

That would be amazing as well. I’ll send you my email on your talk page, Jayce. I’m a bit rusty on my charart skills lmao14:16, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

What I learned from this - I really really suck at texture lmao19:38, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Make the texture a little less bold possibly? you can try lowering the opacity of the layer with the texture on it and maybe blur it a tiny bit. 20:01, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded20:39, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the chest (on the < side and along the bottom) and I also think the different shades in the eye could be smoothed out more.

Reuploaded 21:10, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 22:29, 6/17/2018

Guardian Cat Blanks - For Approval
honestly i'm pretty sure these are a bit big so if yall want i can try and resize them. sorry they're not the exact same as on the nominations, i used them for my own wiki and tweaked the tails and long fur a bit, hope its not a problem.

Maybe add another toe to the short-haired blank to match the long-furred one. 21:21, 6/13/2018

reups i noticed that before you commented and actually did the opposite, woops.

Yes, can you try and resize them? 21:51, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

reups some pixels were lost in the resizing but i tried my best to restore them. that was so much harder than it needed to be.

Are whiskers a requirement? I’m wondering if you should add them, but idk. 23:45, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

can you make the face look more fluffy and the tail on the longhair? 23:52, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

smooth out the lineart on the shorthaired's belly? it looks a little uneven on the > side of the cat

reups guess i forgot to readd whiskers after resizing it oops

Maybe make the back paws a little bit bigger? these are great^^ 02:54, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Thin out the top half of the shorthair's tail a bit?

Gonna butt in here and say the short-haired tail looks fine to me. I don't think it needs to be thinned out at all, considering multiple blanks we use have that same style. (  11:00, 6/14/2018  ) ​

Gosh I do love these. Could you thicken the lineart on the feet and somewhat up the legs on the front paws? (On both blanks) 00:00, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

reups thanks ^^

Perhaps thicken the lineart on the backside of the longhaired and along the topside of the > ear on both^^

the closest front leg seems to be a little too bendy, and should be just a tad straighter. (from what I can tell off similar refs) and I think the shoulder lineart goes too far inwards compared to the longhair. 21:29, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Harepaw (VS) (Ki) - For Approval
tried shading with the brushes i have in firealpaca since i havent done a full charart with it before, couldve been worse.

Define the shading depth everywhere, but especially between the two legs. This looks good :) 22:29, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

reups ty but i still hate white cats with a burning passion. the kit blank however, has never done me dirty.

Expand the shading overall

reups i should really go back to the old art program for shading. oh, how i insulted its brushes. too bad i got so used to them i cant shade with firealpaca.

reups again redid shading. trying to keep it smudged

smooth out the shading

^ I personally think the shading looks smooth enough except for the chest area and just a tad for the tail. I use firealpaca too, so I understand your frustration, danny. You got this! :) 01:09, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

I disagree. I think all the shading should be smoothed out a bit. 23:32, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Ivypool (Q) ~ For Approval
Hi I'm gonna tweak this so she has shredded ears and so the shading actually looks good. Also, can we add stuff if it's a completely different side? None of the other images even show this side of her. I can take it off if I have to, don't worry.

it's all up to you what to put on the side that isn't shown, yes. 03:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

re-up

Define the light on the ---> foreleg a bit? 17:22, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Tree (mediator) ~ CBA
I'll fix some stuff later just....take it. I'm tired of looking at this colour right now 22:49, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:43, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 23:30, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (loner) ~ For Approval
yeah i dont like this --

I think it’s good! Could you define the shading, though? 23:29, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Mothflight (Ro) - For Approval
I like Moth Flight. 23:00, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a lil. 00:47, 6/17/2018

Crowfeather (D) - For Approval
00:54, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

define the texture on the paler parts, and blend the paler bits in just a bit. 22:58, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Skywatcher (W) ~ For Approval
05:28, 6/17/2018

Dewspring (W) ~ For Approval
Cosmo made this first, so I am redoing it, but also not redoing it? I think kits were allowed to redo the chararts Cosmo originally made.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 19:17, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

We decided if she made the original image, then we would act like they were not made, so anyone could "redo" it. Add the texture and define the shading depth. 19:21, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink color needs to match the other images as well, and this seems to be a different shade^^

Add texture as well. Sorry didn’t see Vec's comment. 21:07, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

If I picked the color correctly, codes for the pelt and earpink are 7e7e7e and 896565, if that is helpful. Smooth out the shading a little bit. 22:02, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Needletail (W) - For Approval
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Please don't get offended, but I feel the texture doesn't match the apprentice very well. When I made that, I used a brush to get the effect, and I'm not seeing the same thing here. I get the other images now currently have the texture style this one does, but my image is the first in this set and holds the master pattern.

I like this :) Define the ear pink just a tiny bit. I can’t see it much. But I’m also in a car and the sun’s shining on my screen, so. :P 22:35, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

What brush was it? So I can redo this and nominate the unknown for a redo? <span style="">23:01 Sun Jun 17

Honestly, it was just a size one paint brush tool? Most people use the pencil tool for their textures (or even the pen???? seen that before too), but I was feeling weird and used the paint brush tool with two separate texture layers (a lighter one and a darker one). I would share the file, but I ended up zapping it (along with a few others;;;;) when I moved a bunch of stuff to clean up my laptop. Go ahead and nominate the other one if you want to. ^^

That's what I always do with texture. Huh. I'll mess around with it and see if I can get it right <span style="">23:17 Sun Jun 17

Reuploaded I think I got it closer? <span style="">23:21 Sun Jun 17

Harepaw (VS) (App) ~ For Approval
I may mess with the face shading 22:53, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Good job :D Define the shading, please. 22:54, June 17, 2018 (UTC)