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Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her front leg. 19:34, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach and haunch shading. There's also a strip of shading on the back - blur that, or remove it, since the light source is coming from there. 14:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing yet. 06:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 22:24, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

This could just be me but there is a white pixel on the front left "elbow" (has no idea about anatomy) also lighten the shoulder "highlight" 00:59, 12, 07, 2012

I can see it too. Also, there's an odd strip of unshaded white above that leg. Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Honestly, I think the shading's fine. :/ I fixed that white pixel... And Skt, I don't see any odd strip of shading.. o.o 04:19, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

The "highlight" on the back is really bright and it needs to be blurred. 20:14, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

The highlight is fine.

I dunno, the shading darkness is good, but it doesn't really match the warrior... 16:56, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading should be lightened. It looks gray in some places cause of it, and it doesn't really match the warrior at all. Also define the head shading a bit. And am I blind or is the white pixel in the eyes missing? 00:50, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Meh. I lost the file with the layers, and I haven't had the time to work on this so much. Plus it's been a week; withdrawing/declining. Anyone with a free spot to tweak an image may take over. 04:04, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Stoner said I could take over. :3 Took Ivy's version and added shading. Comments? 05:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I blurred the stomach shading. 05:30, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: And I redo the shading...8D 05:34, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just a suggestion from an outsider.... can you perhaps blur on the back where the shading meets the highlights/light parts? 05:48, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the shading on the tail or add a 'highlight' to it, it looks grey. 15:37, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 17:20, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading, and then define it. :3 03:00, 16, 07, 2012

Re-Uploaded: Looks better now. 8D 03:13, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded Ikilledit 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't really match. Also lighten it so you can see the lineart, and add/majorly define the shading. 05:38, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink on the right. (Our right) 01:33 Sun Jul 15

Still working on this? o3o 02:53, 16, 07, 2012

Yes, re-uploaded. o3o 09:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading a bit more. Unless changes aren't showing. 01:21, 12, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 20:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case the changes aren't showing here he is. 20:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

These stripes don't match the other images in the slightest. I know it's a kit blank and it's harder, but not even the stripe style matches. Would you consider redoing them? 20:59, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the base coat should be much lighter. Breeze whisker  04:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the fur, but I didn't redo the stripes because I think they are pretty similar if another person disagrees then I will try to redo them, but I don't have GIMP and I can't find the xcf file so I would have to redo the entire thing. Sorry, I really don't want to sound rude or anything. 21:23, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, look at this image. It's nowhere close to matching the others. If you don't redo this, someone else will. 02:25, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gotta agree Wild. They really don't look like the others. Breeze whisker  00:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving you my permission to redo this if need be. It needs to match. 04:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, shading needed defined. I'm thinking the stripes might need to have their opacity lowered a tad to match the loner, but that's for you guys to decide 21:47, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think if you blurred the stripes a little, they'd match just fine. Breeze whisker  00:48, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if changes aren't showing, but I still can't see the shading at all. Could you define it more? 21:36, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ehh I think this is too dark, but if it matches, it matches. I also defined the pale belly since apparently it wasn't light enough D: 04:31, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad more. (And maybe a few more flecks? It's your choice, though.) 17:02, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a tad? 16:45, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:34, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's a stripe of lighter fur, almost looks like a lighter chest. Since that's not there on his other images, could you get rid of that? 07:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

It was always there, and look on his loner. 15:33, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just darkened it to match the other images. Latest change was made by Misty. Comments? ^^ 00:07, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Misty already did this tweak. It doesn't need to be done again... 01:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Misty's tweak was declined due to the one week limit, but it was never reverted. Cinder, blur the stomach shading, please.

Oh, Ok. I just thought it was approved since it was never reverted. :P Darken the highlights a tad. 04:26, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleclaw what do you mean by darken it? XP Sorry I'm not very good with vocabulary. 19:13, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I believe Paleh means to dull the highlights and blend them in with the pelt more. 01:25, 12, 07, 2012

Re-Uploaded 00:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

If it doesn't make the white look grey, could you darken the shading a little? Breeze whisker  04:20, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blend/dull the highlights a bit more. 02:37, 15, 07, 2012

Birdy (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading and made it whiter dodge tool ilu  OA was Padfoot. Comments? 03:17 Fri Jul 13

Can you blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? 16:21, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

It looks too white. Tone it down a tad. 17:04, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tried a thin layer of black. Hopefully that worked x.x 20:10 Fri Jul 13

It looks good but I would personally like the ears and the little steak on the forehead darkened a tad. The colors are now better. Lot less white. 20:16, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can't darken them as I don't have the layers. I think it's fine. 20:17 Fri Jul 13

It is fine. There's no specified shade for her gray ears and stripe, it matches description fine. Could you make the earpink less purple though? 23:49, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ilu colour adjust  00:23 Sat Jul 14

blur the shading on her tail. 16:47, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a /tad/, and blend it a bit. 16:51, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:44 Sun Jul 15

Minnowtail (Alt.Ki) ~ Tweaked
The shading needed to be darkened. Most recent OA was me. Comments? 14:05, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more, but it might mean that you have to lighten the base color. 07:40, 14, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 23:21, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

You also might want to thicken ---> side of the shading more <--- that way. (Just a personal preference, not 100% necessary) 02:52, 15, 07, 2012

I'd rather not, but if someone else thinks so I'll do that. 14:49, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Tweaked
needed shading darkened. original artist was Shelly. Comments? 14:25, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I know this isn't why they needed tweaking, but could you define the earpink a tad? 20:41, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:15, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste by the tail, chest and midriff. 02:59, 15, 07, 2012

And by the tail. 06:58, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) - Tweaked
same as warrior. changes aren't showing. Comments? 14:26, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

could you define the earpink? 20:42, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:24, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste along ---> taht side of her tail. 23:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Graymist (W) - Redone
Her stripes were unrealistic, shading was blotchy, etc. I didn't have Sumopaint to work with, so this is a pixlr image....and, actually...not half bad. I was the most recent OA. 00:30, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot to remove that last white pixel on the chest, and blur the earpink a bit more. Pretty<3 00:33, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

This is wonderful, but can you add a few more stripes on the tail? 00:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. Especially behind her shoulder. Very pretty. ^^ Breeze  whisker  04:17, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad larger. 16:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I was originally gonna trash this version and redo everything in Sumo...but I think I can continue to work in Pixlr... 14:39, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste near her tail, and blur the earpink a tad more. 15:41, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just a preference but perhaps smooth out the stripes (as in make them less... bumpy? o3o) 03:15, 16, 07, 2012

Mintfur (SC) (Alt Ki) ~ Tweaked
Just blurred the shading a tad. OA of the most recent was Skye. Comments? 05:21, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit and define it. Oh, and I wasn't an OA. I just changed the lineart, since part of the cite was false.

Vlur the sahding on her front legs. 16:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lol vlur Define the shading a bit. 22:34, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lol sahding Make the shading closer to the lineart. 22:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also add more shading. <span style="">03:06, 15, 07, 2012

Lighten the shading <span style="">23:56 Sun Jul 15

Re-uploaded Thank god for the dodge tool~ 09:39, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ Tweaked
This guy xD I changed the shading placement. OA was R-face. Comments? 05:53 Sat Jul 14

Define the shading. 16:46, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:46 Sun Jul 15

Can you denter the earpink and define the earpink on his right ear? 16:44, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Swoop (KM) - Redone
OA was the Super, incredible, epical Paleh, stripes and mud were inconsistant and the shading needed to be darkened. Took all the colors from the CG. 12:11, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shaing on her haunch and back, and define the stripes in the shaded areas. 16:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:38, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Iceheart wasn't the OA. 0.o It was Nightfall and me. Add more mud. 00:10, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ....oops... <DERPFACEHERE> 00:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste under her front paw closest to us. 00:32, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:11, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly make the mud more gray, just to match. And this could just be me but the stripes look more like fur texture, so make them more... stripey. owo <span style="">03:18, 15, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded The mud is the same color as the CG, I just ran the burn tool over it so it looks more textured. 03:41, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur that mud patch right behind her foreleg a little bit? Breeze whisker  23:57, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad? 16:43, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudtail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Icy, with a redo by me. I redid the shading (woo for still having the file).

Lighten the shading and blur it.. 21:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. (Only the one on our right) <span style="">01:39 Sun Jul 15

I personally think the earpink's fine. <span style="">03:36, 15, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded.

Mistystar (Q) - Redone
Shading made no sense. Last OA was Shelly. Took the shading from Willowpelt and the colors from her apprentice. Comments? 00:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it/define it on her tail just a tad bit? 02:47, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same as the shading on Willowpelt, so I'd rather not.... but how do you blur and define shading? 0.o 06:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Smallstar (Ki) - Tweaked
Shading on black and white cats... eh. And I'm still not a fan of those smudging... Anyways shading needed defining. OA's were Dawnfeather and myself. Comments? <span style="">03:41, 15, 07, 2012

Can you make the earpink more triangular? 15:50, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading a tad more. 17:31, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. <span style="">03:49, 16, 07, 2012

Mudfur (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Cloudy, and needed mottles. And I promise, I did not redo this. I just added mottles then defined the shading a tad since the mottles made the shading look a tad light. And this time I'll work on the image more omments? 04:16, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

The mottles look a tad dark 05:35, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 06:21, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the midriff shading. 17:22, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit on the tail. Breeze whisker  23:55, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that shoulder shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:56, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA is Rowan, and the color needed to be tweaked, and the shading needed to be defined. I also defined the earpink. Comments?

Enlarge the earpink in the right ear, and who are you exactly? 12:51, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. 17:30, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Stoner, you derp. You forgot to sign. xD

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I defined/darkened the shading on him. OA= Bramble, than redone by Rowan. Changes aren't showing yet. >.> Comments? <span style="">19:29 Sun Jul 15

Changes are now showing! :) <span style="">22:39 Sun Jul 15

Can you make the earpink color match the other image and make it more triangular? 02:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadedo.o The earpink is straight from the other image, but I made it more triangular ;). I can't fix the one on (our) left because it'll erase the pelt colour. <span style="">03:10 Mon Jul 16

I still can't see the shading very well. To me, he seems darker on his kit image than his apprentice. Not sure if that's just me being a derp though  04:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, do you want me to try and fix it or are you as onfused as I am now? :P <span style="">14:54 Mon Jul 16

Maybe you want to lighten his base coat a couple shades? 15:43, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomkit (Ki) - Tweaked
Ew, blotchy shading. Anyways, I just added a layer of shading over it. OA was Sandy, with a tweak by Ice and Leaf-storm. Comments? 19:58, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading right over her left leg. Looks good! Breeze whisker  23:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading over left leg. And thanks. :) 03:07, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Rockshade (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Yes, this is tweaked. Icy watched me do the entire thing. Jeez, that image was ( no offense DJ, please don't shoot me ) quite a mess. o.o I redid the shading.

Lighten the image a teensy bit. c: He's bootiful~ 21:16, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

I think how dark it is is fine. Maybe define the shading between the legs a little, though. Breeze whisker  23:53, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Raindrop (Ki) ~ Tweaked
She needed to be lightened and shading needed to be defined o3o OA was Shadowedheart 02:51, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a teensy bit. 15:44, July 16, 2012 (UTC)