Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 252

Fallowsong (W) - Approved
19:29, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Might just be my eyes, but I think the base is slightly duller on the other images. Mind color picking again? And the shading could be smoothed on the haunch. 20:54, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:57, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and define the depth everywhere. You could try using a couple of other images that have already been approved for an example on how smooth it should be, if that helps. Her eyes need to be brighter. They look almost like a pale green here while on her other images they look golden. 14:49, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded instant depth! 22:13, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think it could be smoothed out more

Reuploaded boom  21:28, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed some more. 15:52, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:08, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth it out more. If you've gotten many comments repeating to smooth it, I'd suggest smoothing it out a lot more than you have been, at least just on the outer edges of the shading. 14:38, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This shading hates me. 22:42, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth it out a tad more on the legs, face, and neck. 16:54, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:23, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch, neck, and face shading some more, particularly the areas where you applied depth. 22:06, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:51, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall, it's looking a bit blotchy. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded shading is the end of me  04:16, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading a bit more on the haunch and on the left shoulder (our left)? 13:19, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 16:40, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and shoulder some more. 17:24, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:13, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and could you expand the shading on the flank so it reaches a little up to define the shoulder? It looks a bit flat there. Dunno how well I explained it, so I can provide a redline if needed. Smooth the shading on the haunch, closer to the line art, there's a few areas that look blotchy. Define the light on the chin too? It looks almost like she has a darker patch on her chin at the moment. 03:28, July 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I got everything correctly? *continues jamming to Toby Fox*  22:28, July 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 00:36, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 02:09, July 20, 2019 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Alt. W) - Approved
Probably one of the last images before the major break. 23:37, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading and add some to the belly/chest area 01:18 Fri Jul 12

Reuploaded There was shading already there, but I defined it. I hope this looks better! 01:40, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading slightly and smooth it out on the haunch. 03:25, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded There, definitely visible now. 03:38, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

The haunch shading could still be smoothened out 14:14, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:24, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch more, define the depth on the tail, ears, and lower part of the chest between the legs, and expand the shading on the front leg furthest away. I'm not sure if it's just me, but the shading looks kind of flat. I don't know if you could add some more depth to it? 14:46, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, upon looking again, the shading looks fine and I think if you define the depth in the areas I suggested, that will fix the flatness I'm seeing. 14:48, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:54, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out haunch and stomach shading. 22:05, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:51, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the overall shading a fair bit more. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded  04:16, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out a little bit overall, but especially on the haunch and the muzzle. I also think the shading might be leaking a little bit at the base of the chest. 13:25, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 16:40, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and shoulder a bit, and there's shading leaking away from the lineart on the haunch and shoulder. 17:26, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:13, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth on both front legs and smooth the shoulder shading. 03:31, July 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yep yep  22:28, July 17, 2019 (UTC)

Looking good! CBA? 00:35, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 02:09, July 20, 2019 (UTC)