Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Runningwind (Ki) ~ Redone
do not ask me to define the earpink it's the same colour as the warrior okay. Anyways, redone for stripes. Cooments? 08:58 Sun Dec 16

Can you maybe add a bit more stripes to him? I know that since it's a kit blank, it would be hard, so if you can't that's fine. 20:54, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

OMG so adorable<3333 define the earpink. 03:51, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

If I define the earponk, it will not match his warrior and apprentice. The earpink can straight from the warriors .xcf and I'm not changing it if I can help it. 03:56 Mon Dec 17

I think it has plenty enough stripes Misty, except on the leg.... that seems to be lacking a bit. 17:23, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded some stripes for you runningkit 01:07 Wed Dec 19

earponk xD Could you define the shading between the front legs a touch? 21:33, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:29 Mon Dec 24

Define the ear-pink 02:42, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

It matches the other images. It's fine.

Rainfur (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be light grey and add the pale under belly ( I think I should've just redone it...it barely matches. ) I also redid the shading because it was icky. OA was moi 03:36 Tue Dec 18

Define the shading a little more? 05:49, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:25 Tue Dec 18

Oh crud, just realised I've actually got three tweaks up... I'd forgotten about little Runningkit up there... So... withdrawing this so as to not break tweaking rules. 10:49 Tue Dec 18

Okay, we're back up. o3o 11:32 Wed Dec 19

Do you think you could blur the stripes a bit, and maybe lighten them? They really stick out against the pelt a lot. 21:31, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, and they a look a bit too paint brushed on. Can you maybe sharpen them a bit? 17:58, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 12:42, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (A) - Redone
Lol this sucks but it had to be redone to match the warrior which Berry did a great job in making the pattern amazing in which I couldn't match. But I tried and I'll probably end up redoing it anyways ouo Comments? 01:22, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeeeeaaah.... *cough* still really doesn't match. Plus it's a bit messy. 06:20, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think that you blurred too much. And though I don't really know for sure, I think that the other images are just smudged, not blurred. 17:47, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working?

Frostfur (Q) - Tweaked
Got the file from Cloudy, she can vouch for this not being redone. xD Did the same to this as I did all the other images. Last OA was Cloudy. Don't think changes are showing. Comments? 10:15, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

They are for meee~ Blur the tail shading a tad. (yeah it's tweaked she got the file lol, wouldn't matter to me either way, since it needed to be fixed anyways)

Reuploaded 23:56, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Snooky(A) - Redone
OA is Iceheart, looked gray and black. Comments? I think I failed with th shading. x3 21:05, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still looks a bit grey. Define the shading and the eyes - I can't see them. 22:46 Mon Dec 24

Re-uploaded I redid the shading. owo 23:02, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, the light/depth in the eye, and blur the patches and if the wrong version is showing, just ignore   02:44, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading again, and I think the eyes are fine. owo 23:19, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes need to be lightened too. At a certain angle they look black. 00:01, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the edges more blurred than smudged, to match the other images? 01:23, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Q) - Redone
Redone to match pattern. Last OA be Skt. 15:25, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

I know that the warrior was already approved (I don't think I was on), but the stripes look like squiggles and it looks odd that way 21:55, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tweaked the stripes and added a couple more small one to help fill the space 22:53, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

This applies to both images you have up right now, but her eye shouldn't be closed like that. There was no way for it to be closed. She'd simply be missing and eye. It should be kinda like Rain. 03:00, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (W) - Tweaked
Most recent OA is me, needed to be lighter (even though personally I don't think it needed it.) I don't think changes are showing. Don't worry, I'm working on Brambleberry right now  18:28, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. A) - Redone
Redone to match warrior. Last OA be me 18:55, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the tail stripes. 02:59, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing (W) ~ Tweaked
Redid the shading.

Blur the back a little. 21:33, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Icewing (Q) ~ Tweaked
Redid the shading.

Frostfur (Ki) - Tweaked
Same as others. Last OA was Scar I think. Comments? 23:50, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (P3) (A) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading and lightened the base color. Latest OA was Ducksplash. 01:42, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Still a little too dark.