Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 15

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*Makes note to lay of patched cats**Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:39, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Add some more shading, blur it and add some highlights too if you already haven't! Otherwise, it looks.........alright. -- Pan das ong Proud Owner of a Imaginary Panda! 00:21, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

He Looks awesome. All I can see is maybe add some highlights? -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:43, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

HIGHLIGHTS AREN'T MANDATORY! Pandasong, the shading is blended to the best of my ability.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:34, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Highlights are not necessary, that is true. A shaded cat without highlights is both simple and approvable. Swallow, you just need to blend the transition between your patches, darken the ear pink and make it less smudgy, and that's about it. He looks very nice. -- Bramble My Realm 02:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just take the patch on his chest and connect it with the other brown patch on his leg; it looks a little unatural right now. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:06, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded made the ear pink darker and redder, connected the patches and blended to the best of my ability without it looking smudged.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 16:01, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - It looks great! Just add shading to the bottem of his tail and this should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:55, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that better?*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 22:03, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. All he needs now is you need to blend that patch right near his mouth, because it's just hard line where the transition is, and make the ear pink a more dark pink color than purple. Also, on his right (our right) ear, move the ear pink inside the ear a bit more, and make it more triangular. -- Bramble My Realm 01:53, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry that I haven't been on much. I think my latin teacher likes it when we fail.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 03:46, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Lol, I know what you mean. I think this is ready. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:38, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

^_^ The changes I mentioned above still need to be made. Then it should be ready. -- Bramble -san  19:12, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, Sorry! I didn't relize she hadn't uploaded a new file when she posted that. @_@ Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire  20:10, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Lol Moss. It's fine. Yes, though, Swallow, you forgot to upload the new image on the 26. :) -- Bramble -san  20:18, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot. Better now?

Make the ear pink this color: and make it a more fine triangular shape, keeping it inside the ear. On the right ear especially, you can that the ear pink has gone out of the ear and onto the temple area. -- Bramble -san  00:05, September 29, 2009 (UTC)