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Wrenflight (Star) ~ For Approval
took way too long 02:57, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Nice texture! It looks like there's black at the edge of her eye-to the left or whatever-and I think it could be lightened❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 03:01, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

That's eye depth, Apple. Anyways, smoothen out the shading on the chest, this (-->) side. :) 03:14, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

I realized :/ Blur the texture a tiny bit❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 13:31, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Reuploaded  23:01, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the texture just a tiny bit? The lines don't seem to be nearly as sharp on her other two images. 00:21, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:11, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's me or not, but smooth out the shading?BrokenFoot 19:59, February 3, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded I think it's fine, but... 01:50, February 4, 2017 (UTC)

Could be smoothed out a fair bit more; remember, it should be more gradient-like, but this, for lack of a better phrase, cuts off.

Reuploaded 20:21, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think it could be lightened a little, the darkness doesn't look quite right as it is. and the shading on the head could curve with the head itself a bit more. 00:31, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:32, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth of the shading a little? I also think it wouldn't hurt to expand it a little farther downwards on the face. 13:44, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Add amber eyes, as per the cite on her page

Reuploaded Sorry for being late, I was sick 21:51, February 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading along the bottom of the head (around the chin) and smooth out the shading more on the flank, and possibly the tail? 13:00, 2/17/2017

Reuploaded 23:58, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe connect the shading on the side of the face with the chin shading? They look odd separated, and I'm pretty sure with that light source there would be some shading there. 23:15, February 18, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading on the <-- ear just a bit more

Reuploaded 00:49, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, I think my comment may have been misleading -- I meant for you to define the shading on the right side of the face, not the left side. I still can't see the shading in the bottom right corner of the face, and I don't think there should be all that shading on the left side of the face -- it contradicts the left-side light source that is represented by the legs, chest, and body. 21:39, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:53, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Slatepaw (A) ~ Declined
Quite a while to get the shading right, but I am still not confident about it. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:37, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the shading at all, darken it. Also define the eye depth.❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 22:49, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Define the texture. At first, I couldn't tell tell that it had texture at all. 23:06, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tell me if it is still difficult to spot the shading / texture, becausee I can't set my laptop to the right amount of brightness and darkness. Shadowbright67 (talk) 07:44, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more, I still can't really see it. 13:32, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink a bit :) 02:14, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think part of the head is warped? their right ear looks odd. 00:29, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Realized the navigator showed exactly what it would look like not from my laptop, and I thought I already showed the updated version. Also, I'm not too sure about the ear. Shadowbright67 (talk) 02:10, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and smooth the shading on the legs/paws. 23:50, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 'I cannot tell whether I just updated it into the same ''file as it was between February 9 and now. If so, I will do the changes tomorrow / Sunday. (I am pretty sure I replaced the old file on the folder anyway.) Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:25, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Could you recede the shading slightly on the <-- side of the --> back leg? The light everywhere else looks like it's coming from the left, but if so, there shouldn't be so much shading there.

Still working? 23:17, February 18, 2017 (UTC)

Declined due to the lack of work. 21:39, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Plumclaw (Q) ~ For Approval
Defined the shading more

Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 16:22, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think this needs a date and reservation on the chart

I reserved her. Reuploaded Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 20:37, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 15:09, Feb 16, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I can somewhat see that it is there, but it is extremely faint. If no one else is having issues seeing it, feel free to ignore this. I don't have the best eyesight at times. 18:43 Thu Feb 16

Could you define the eye depth some? Unless I'm blind and it's there. I can't see any, so if there's none, try using an orange color as the depth marker, because it will look better, depth-wise. 13:01, 2/17/2017

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  09:00, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

Running Fox (Kit) - For Approval
Alright I messed up the first time because I accidentally posted it in approved, so sorry about that lol. Not very good at navigating my way around the wiki. Homosneksual (talk) 02:37, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

It's fine, I understand. However, you need to go here and reserve the image first, and the name of the image should also be File:Running Fox.kit.png. As for the image, define the shading and the red speckles, please. 02:44, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Homosneksual (talk) 03:16, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading and blur/smooth the --> ear pink. And don't align your images. His description makes me think of a cat with chicken pox lol 03:20, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Is there white in the eyes? Also, smudge/blur the earpink in the ---> ear 03:21, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded There's white in the eyes, but only one pixel which acts as the glare. Homosneksual (talk) 03:42, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge ear pink a bit more, the one towards the right? Doesn't really reach the lineart. Also, smudge shading a bit on the neck and above left leg. Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:22, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Homosneksual (talk) 03:11, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on <- leg.

Reuploaded Homosneksual (talk) 23:48, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back paw, along with the tail, darken the shading as well. Some of the lineart has color leaking into it, that needs to be fixed. Maybe define the light and blur the earpink a tad. Nice job. ~Patch   feather~   15:54, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading in the tail? 02:18, February 16, 2017

Reuploaded Homosneksual (talk) 16:40, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest, and define it on the legs. 23:16, February 18, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (Star) ~ CBA
16:49, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the depth in the eyes a bit? And possibly define the light/shading on the face?

Reupload I am trying something new with the eyes, hope they look better, also sorry for not uploading. 23:13, February 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading behind the front shoulder, as I believe there'd be some there. 13:02, 2/17/2017

I feel like his eyes are too yellowish to be amber. 02:29, February 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload I hope I have done what you meant, Winter. Also, I might have read yellow instead of amber. 02:49, February 18, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 21:25, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Fallowpaw (MCA) - CBA
This is my third. The herbs are fun to do ;P 23:51, February 14, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the white should extend a little further down the rear, along the ---> hip line, because right now the white seems to be focused on the lower part of her back. 00:35, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

Isn't the rear the back part (the bum, in this case?) IDK. 00:42, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

Yes, but to me it looks like the white patch is more so on the back than the actual bum. IDK maybe it's just me. 00:47, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

Okay, that's fair. I'd like a second opinion though. 00:51, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

I hate to be that person, but receding it from <--- side wouldn't hurt. It goes onto the middle of the back how it is positioned now. Just erase some off. 18:34 Wed Feb 15

Reuploaded -- 22:00, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

It looks more like it's on the haunch than the rear? I would think that it would really only be like this, in terms of size?

Reuploaded -- 22:37, February 15, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading in the <== earpink? 13:05, 2/17/2017

Reuploaded -- 04:56, February 18, 2017 (UTC)

Can you lighten her a bit. I almost thought it was black. 15:07, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 17:49, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 21:29, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Fallowstar (L) ~ For Approval
Haven't done this in a while. - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:06, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the lighter belly a little?

I can't see that the legs are lighter very well, either. 00:14, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yeah that was kinda dark. - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:30, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and shading on the face a bit. 01:54, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Don't the hind legs need to be lighter too? Shypaw11 (talk) 01:57, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded They need to be light but you can hardly see them. - Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  02:12, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken and define the shading? 13:06, 2/17/2017

Re-uploaded - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  21:55, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Darken it a fair bit more, please.

Re-uploaded - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  23:50, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

I'm a little confused what your light source is. There should be at least some light on --> side of the chest. I'm not sure if it's because the shading is faint or what, but it looks a bit muddled there. Darken and smooth out the shading..its fairly blotchy. Sorry if this was a bit on the blunt side...I'm dealing with some housemate problems and typing this quickly on my phone... <span style="">22:32 Tue Feb 21

Twig (KP) ~ CBA
Dear lord how do make charart. This took me an hour and I never spend this long on an image. Also @Skt and Skye I FIGURED OUT YOUR SECRET <span style="">03:05, 2/17/2017

i'm having a bit of trouble making out the tabby patches, you think you can define/brighten/whatever them just a little? (secret?) 05:23, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Your guys' charart secret that makes em look like friggin masterpieces. <span style="">12:45, 2/17/2017

CBA? 21:33, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Acorntail (D) - For Approval
exactly how i pictured him when i first started reading warriors. ~Patch   feather~   04:21, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Hmm...looks awesome! Maybe try adding some more shading along the tail-tip on the back side? Unless I'm blind and there is some, disregard this <span style="">04:26, 2/17/2017

could you define the shading on the legs? 05:20, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  ~Patch    feather~   15:05, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for texture. ~Patch   feather~   14:12, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Fennelstar (L) - For Approval
I may actually redo this if I keep getting annoyed with how it looks. I tried this 3 different ways and..meh. <span style="">16:37 Fri Feb 17

Reuploaded Ugh. <span style="">18:20 Fri Feb 17

You have an extra "." In your file name 19:36, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think I'm just blind but I cannot make out the shading <span style="">20:10, 2/17/2017

Causally slides in to let you know I renamed this for you.

Reuploaded. <span style="">18:05 Sun Feb 19

Cool design. I would even out the shading more (by which I mean, blur more) since the shading seems really thick and dark in certain areas, since I cannot make out the line art. Could be just my screen. (btw sry guys I know I'm not in the project, just felt like randomly popping in...) 04:55, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Seeing all of the lineart is not, and has never been, mandatory. Nor is blurred shading. Which I don't think Sunjaw blurs hers.

Birchstar (SC) (L) ~ For Approval


Define the silver patch <span style="">17:01, 2/19/2017

Reuploaded

Smooth out the shading?

Reuploaded

Define the silver patch some more. Also, I believe the stripes should be black. 03:26, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

Theres nothing saying the stripes should be black. Its fine <span style="">14:33, 2/20/2017

Silver tabby heavily indicates black stripes. We tweaked images months ago for this reason. With our rules, the stripes should be black.

Reuploaded

Define the silver patch; all I'm seeing is black stripes 07:14, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Hawkstar (L) - For Approval
jesus, this was hard to make, still not happy tbh. — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  18:34, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a bit?

Reuploaded — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  18:09, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Dovestar (RC) (L) ~ For Approval
Eh...not totally pleased with the blind eye :/ Any advice? 18:50, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe, instead of the pupil being black, make it a milky-blue color? Blind eyes are usually like that. 19:00, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit, and perhaps smudge the gray paws and muzzle. This is also a good example of a blind eye, which I think is what Su was going for.

Reups Thank you so much. I hope this is better. 01:58, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

I don't know if I'm blind or not, but for a moment, I couldn't see the milky blue in his eye. 😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 06:26, February 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

His eye is fine <span style="">14:33, 2/20/2017

Silverpaw (TPB) (Star) - For Approval
Being in love with gray eyes 20:03, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

This is so beautiful!! Can you smooth out that shading on the belly some? <span style="">15:09, 2/22/2017

Raincloud (D) - For Approval
I like her, she actually has some sense. 20:29, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (NP) (A) ~ For Approval
went with a simple one this time 19:58, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

Simple not to me Troll. XD Blur the shading on the stomach a bit, looks a lil sharp. 20:00, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

David doesn't blur their shading and hasn't for a long while.

reuploaded blurring? never heard of her 21:14, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Domino (Lo) - For Approval
since there's nothing anywhere that says I can't use something I uploaded for my personal image at one point... ;D jaw edits are not fun.

There's a little bit of waste right under the chin, and perhaps define the light on the <-- front paw

Re-uploaded. Defined the light on three of the four legs before I get told about that too.

Ooh pretty, Cloudy! Define the ear-pink 07:15, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Milkfur (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
All colors from deputy image. Comments? 20:24, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

Could you extend the white in the eye on -> one? I seriously can't tell it's there at all. Also define the facial shading a bit.

Reuploaded. This is about as defined as I can get it. 20:32, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a bit? 21:24, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:32, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Remove some shading on the top of the tail and define the depth on the face <span style="">22:12, 2/21/2017

Reuploaded. 22:31, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Fallensnow (Warrior) ~ For Approval
Not to be pushy. But aren't I supposed to be in the apprentices' section now? I asked to join, and Stealth welcomed me in, I just never got put into the group. :) 22:11, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading and define the earpink just a bit. Very nice (: <span style="">22:26 Tue Feb 21

A SW will add you in soon. Please be patient. You dont technically have to be on the list to be a part of PCA but just make sure youre keeping track of how many images you do so you can become a warrior later. As for the image, smooth out the shading some more <span style="">22:28, 2/21/2017

Reuploaded 22:32, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit purple-ish, maybe shift it more towards a pink? Also, I think the shading could be smoothed out a bit on the chest and tail. 22:36, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:50, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the head and neck area, and define the shading on the <--- front leg and hind leg the furthest away from us? 19:18, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Falling Rain (SC) - For Approval
meh  00:45, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Define shading depth on the belly a bit? 19:19, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

​Slatepelt(W)~For Approval
Sorry if I did something I wasn't supposed to, I forgot how to do everything...😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:17, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded! Fixed the shading, was too sharp or something😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:27, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

As a WindClan cat, he needs short fur. 04:49, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

He's a thick-furred cat...😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:52, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Thick-furred does not mean long-furred. 04:57, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

That's embarrassing😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:58, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

To back up what Bluestar said; unless they are specifically called a "long-furred WindClan cat" or a "short-furred RiverClan cat", they should be short for WindClan and long for RiverClan, due to multiple statements in the series about their pelt lengths. Also, please stop aligning and thumbing your images.

As for the image itself; smooth out the shading a lot, give the eye white, and swap the tail shading; the source you have would have the tail shading on the other end, I do believe.

Is there a pupil? Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 16:53, February 22, 2017 (UTC)