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Leafstar (Q) - Redone
OA was me (fun fact, this was my second ever approved image!) I am so glad I could kill this. I redid the stripes and the cream, and I tinted the shading, so hopefully it matches better. Oh, and the markings aren't as blurred as they were last time, though I think some of the stripes may need blurred more, not sure, gimmie your opinion. I hate stretching out stripes on queens ._. 18:00, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 8D 18:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty <3 Blur the earpink :3 19:47, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful! Define the shading a tad. 01:31, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so glad that you guys agree that this looks better :) 02:50, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

This is georgious. <3 Possibly make the shading more brown and for the sake of matching the other images, make the cream that's shaded... more creamy? oWo 09:14, 01, 08, 2012

The cream's fine. It's just shading... 09:59, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

The thing is...the shading is tinted. Paleh (I think) who made her leader image, I could ask for the hex code of the shading tint since that's kind of difficult to pick off of the image :P At least the shading isn't black like last time. 16:53, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck a little. Breeze whisker  20:28, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

What the heck? I tried to post like two times, and I thought it wen through... 0.o anyways, the shading color is just the base brown color set to multiply. 00:25, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm going to sound really stupid, but I don't know how to shade with using the multiply function ^^;  01:39, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh don't worry, it's simple. You shade just like you would shade with black, except right above the opacity slider, there's a Mode drop down list. Pick multiply on that and there you go. :3 07:48, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did I do it right? ^^;  18:17, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fernpelt (A) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading. The most recent OA was Scarlet. 20:31, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shaing on her haunch and forearm. 23:34, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh wow it doesn't even look like I blurred it. >_> 23:49, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit more. 07:00, 06, 08, 2012

Reuploaded Haunch shading, y u be difficult? 16:12, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a little bit more? 10:53, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if someone else agrees I'll glady do that. 12:34, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it could be defined a bit. 19:42, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:30, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and it had shading and earpink issues. I also made the image darker, and I prefer not to lighten the shading. 06:57, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading just little bit.

Define the earpink on her left ear. (Our right) 17:53, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Henry (KP) - Tweaked
All I did was add some more shading, but I don't think the changes are showing. In the next upload, I'll define the ear pink and add depth to the eye. 15:03, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading to the far left.. It looks black. 16:05, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front leg 05:27, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP) - Redone
Redone to match warrior and apprentice. Now that I look at it again the markings are slightly off in color, I'll fix that in the next upload. Comments? Breeze whisker  01:38, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in her eyes a bit and can you texturize the edges a bit more? I found a mottle-y type of brush can really help make the patches look like the warrior, along with smudges. 02:19, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 05:22, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a bit derpy eyed. Maybe thicken the pupils by a pixel. 09:52, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any excuse to use the chalk brush is a good one to me. I kinda like the eyes, though. I'd rather not change them. Breeze whisker  15:03, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the patches a little more...yellowish? The pattern itself is fine, but the color's still a little off.

Reuploaded. I dunno. Breeze whisker  19:27, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some. 07:14, 09, 08, 2012

I'd rather not change it. Breeze whisker  17:28, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Defined shading, earpink and eye depth. OA was Mistystar139. Comments? 10:16 Tue Aug 7

Blur the belly and shoulder shading ^^  13:09, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the belly shading. 00:36, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. 02:10, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded And because Berry is a derp, she forgot to save the .xcf >.< 06:19 Wed Aug 8

Blur the front leg's shading (the one closest to us). 18:51, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

I personally believe that shading's fine. 07:19, 09, 08, 2012

Cherrytail (Q) - Redone
Lol ifail. OA was me. 06:45, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and give moar texture to the patches Dudethisrocks 06:48 Wed Aug 8

Could you whiten the white some more? It looks gray. 10:51, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

The white looks grey cause it's in shadow. 11:41, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the earpink on < side. 18:50, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't remove the earpink as the ear could be facing to the side or frontwards, so it's just the artist's perspective. 07:20, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you texturize the edge of the patches more dramatically? I achieved this with a small galaxy brush in GIMP. 18:14, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Willowshine (alt. ki) ~ Redone
Lol this sucks. But whatever. OA was Froon and I redid due to shading and earpink problems. 11:22, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight// define the tail shading. Cute <3 Camrynn 12:04, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink just a bit? :3 13:09, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. 16:45, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit.

'''Reploaded. '''I redid the shading with Icy stalking me on Join.me. She was telling me what to fix xP 19:40, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the tip of the arm near the stomach and dull the highlights? 19:41, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the arms. 02:53, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Gorsetail (P3) (Q) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to have mottled tabby on her. 8D I think the OA was Ivy. x3 07:35, August 9, 2012 (UTC)'

Blur the stripe on her back. 14:08, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, can you define the shading a bit? 18:35, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Shadepelt (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Breezy, and the shading needed blurring. In the process, I over-blurred, saved it, then GIMP crashed, so I had to add another layer of shading. 

Blur the shading on her haunch 18:13, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Lo) ~ Tweaked
I darkened the pelt, and defined the shading, as well as blurred it. In the process, I accidentally murdered the ear pink, so I needed to redo that. OA is Sweetflower.