Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 55

Rosepetal (W) - Declined
She needed to be brought back to the color she was before to match her other images, and actually be dark cream. I need to fix some shading, I know. I'll do that in the next upload. Breeze whisker  21:26, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, define it, and make it more triangular. 22:16, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe tinge the shading browner/redder. She looks kinda ashy/gray. 00:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. (Yes, the highlights are tinted green.) Breeze  whisker  00:56, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the base just a tad? It doesn't quite match the other two images.

Make the earpink more triangular and a tad smaller. 01:03, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/redden the ear-pink 03:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's all I'm going to do with the earpink. Breeze whisker  17:37, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and perhaps make it thinner around the back area. 21:01, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading along her back looks fine...but maybe define the shading on her legs a tad? 01:18, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  04:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add a bit more shading to the back of her head and ears? 16:22, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Breeze whisker  05:32, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

I know you said that's all you were going to do with the earpink, but I can barely see it. Can you at least define it a little? 15:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a smidge. 03:45, 08, 07, 2012

Sorry, but this has been up for far longer than a week. Declined. 05:53, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Declined
Needed ragged fur (Changes may not be showing yet) Ohgawd I killed it Comments? 01:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. -- 16:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the ragged-ness? O_o Maybe make it match her queen? 16:22, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, wouldn't her fur be a bit more ragged as both a loner and rogue, probably from the fighting, and all of that?

True, but I think it could be toned down just a tad. XD Skt Omnia vincit amor 20:18, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 04:47, 01, 07, 2012

Blur the tail shading. Nice job, Stoner. 21:00, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Wait - should I tone down the furriness or not? I dunno...but I kinda think that the queen has a little bit of raggedness... 23:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know, but it makes more sense for her to be fluffier when she's outside a Clan and doesn't care about her appearance. I think it should stay... 23:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should tone it down just a tad. Yes she'd be more ragged outside the Clan, but this is going a bit overboard. 22:10, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the fur looks fine, I've even seen strays that look like that. -- 18:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

It should be toned down. This is very ragged-y. xD 23:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I agree; the ragged-ness should be toned down. Even if she IS outside the Clan, it's far too much. 01:49, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

This has been up for a week too... Sorry, but I have to decline it. 05:58, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Kittypet) ~ Declined
He was a kittypet for part of his kithood. So, comments?

-- ♫Feather nose♫ ♥♥Rarity Lover♥♥ 16:37, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

He was never said to have a collar, and there was no mention of any collar needing to be removed when he and his family joined SkyClan. Besides, if anything, this would just be a tweak to the kit. Declining. 16:53, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Rainstorm (W) ~ Declined
Tweaked the pattern to be more mottled. The colours and shading are all the same :3 Comments? 06:45, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Also, all I did was dodge the shading away and made the mottles smaller :3 06:47, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

After discussing this with the other senior members, we have deemed (with valid proof) that this image was redone, without necessity, and therefore will be declined. Berry, you don't lie about whether or not you tweak or redo an image. If you'd like to redo one, please, ask the senior members for permission next time.

Archiving. 15:13, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Lo) - Auto-declined
Seeing as I'm doing this... comments? 03:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful <3 Add earpink and eye color, define the shading and thee's waste by her face. Oh, and blur the stripes a tiny bit. 03:23, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes as well. The ones on her leader aren't that thick.

Erase the waste 03:47, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. The stripes don't match the leader/rogue, the pattern isn't even the same, the cream is the wrong colour, there is no shading to speak of, the cream is overblurred, and there's waste. You have a week. 07:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'm actually going to suggest an auto-decline on this. Part of the criteria for it even staying up is you need to actually //have shading//, and know how to use it. There isn't any visible shading on this. None at all.

Agreed. There's also waste and white pixels, the cream's overblurred, and the stripes don't really match. Auto-declining. 07:08, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:11, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

No, Storm. The point of an auto-decline is it's actually declined, and you need to repost it....>.>

Pinestar (Alt. L) - Withdrawn
Oh... That looked so much better in photoshop... Anyway, shading and highlights needed to be tweaked. I also added depth in the eyes. 02:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. 04:59, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his legs, maybe? Breeze whisker  05:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:02, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his tail and chest. 19:32, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the face "highlight". 02:27, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest and haunch highlight. 06:47, 09, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded 22:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights should be toned down more - they could also be blurred. Also, the shading needs to be blurred and darkened. 02:33, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing this because a) It's driving me crazy, b) I hate it, c) photoshop hates it, d) There are other things I wanna work on 18:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)