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Willowshine (Alt. MCA 2) - CBA
So I realized they use the same picture in Cats of the Clans, and she is listed as an apprentice, so here's the same version as the one I did before. It should be pretty exact as I have the file and everything. 02:48, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

I thought there's already one for her apprentice version. They're both pale gray tabbies, the only difference is the eye color. Anyways, maybe darken the shading a little? 03:53, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't think so, the other pale's are for the writing, these are after pictures. 04:00, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. 07:51, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Patchkit (MV) ~ For Approval
B) 00:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? He's so adorable :3 00:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. too bad he's dead lel 00:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded again and chnged a few things i didnt like 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Nettlepaw (MV) (A) ~ For Approval
These edit conflicts burn. I saw the waste, I'll fix it next upload. 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome. :D I love those pale rings on the tail. Could you lighten the shading on the chin and the throat a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Damn I wanted this lol. Mind smoothing out the shading on the legs? 00:30, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Spoiler alert! :) He looks a bit gold rather than ginger, can you make him a tad more ginger? I could be wrong but the tabby stripes seem golden. Gorgeous! 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorry Stealth, but I colorpicked off of a photo of a real life ginger cat (This one). It's just my shading that makes it look golden :/ I dulled the highlights slightly, though, so maybe that'll fix the problem? 10:33, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad bit on the face/muzzle, it looks more like a marking than shading. That might just be me, though. 01:38 March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitfur (E) ~ For Approval
Bunfur confirmed. 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the tabby stripes lighter? They just seem too dark to me. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

i think they're fine unless others disagree - i think it's artist choice on stripe darkness? 10:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

stripes are fine, a shae was never specified. anyway lighten up the area where his tail meets his back just a little. 14:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 21:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading juuuust a tad. Not much, but kinda like what you did for Mousefang's kit.

re-up 18:38, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenwing (MC) ~ For Approval
I'll probably redo the earpink later 00:10, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! There's waste near the herbs. Also mind lightening him up just a little bit so that the shading can be a bit more visible? 00:29, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

He's black, not dark gray. Please do not lighten him anymore. He'll just be tweaked later to be darker. I actually think darkening the shading and perhaps playing with your shading and highlight layers might solve the problem.

Define the ear pink? 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I just read the book poor him. Make the eyes a tad darker please. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes are actually fine. 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

lel he deserved it, anyway add some shading or something to the herbs so they dont look flat. 14:46, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I pretty much redid most of this because I lost the layered file. 1:11 25 Mar. 2015 (UTC)

This should say "For Evaulation" since you are a kit, but no need to change it. I'll promote you since you know what you are doing. 02:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more, please. 06:17, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstar (L) - For Approval
So happy I finally got my first leader image. :D I'm really happy with how he turned out - I tried to make him look like a burmese cat, but I think the darker face kind of got lost in the shading. Ah well. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:16, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink :3 So much like an oak tree, so beautiful(like I said in the chat) 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I see the earpink fine, tbh 02:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very well done! Can you define the legs shading? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading too, please. ^^

Along with define it, could you blur the tail shading a little bit? I can see it, but it looks hard-edged. 15:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the muzzle shading a bit? It almost looks like he has a rope tied around it xD like a muzzle. Lovely image, I love the way you did the texture. =) 06:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Birchface (W) - For Approval
Welp.

he looks a little green to me, maybe make him a bit more orange or something idk 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a tad more brown, like one tick or two. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love this image so much.

Define the shading on the paws farthest from us, if there is any. 00:03, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Bloomheart (W) ~ For Approval
Well, I tried. This is my first in a while, sorry for the cruddiness. For the eyes, I didn't know what color they were so I went based off a really cool chart which I will link. They're hazel, like a greenish for Blooms? Flowers? Pink ears also based off what the same chart said was normal. 00:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. :) Add shading to the right side of the front leg. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Also, would you mind lightening the shading a tad? Correct me if I'm wrong 01:09, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Done so. Looks a bit better, did the MLP style of shading the back legs-  01:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the ear pink a bit bigger.

It would suck if you guys made me edit it so much and then regect it, but it's good practice  01:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye color 05:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. Remember, defining doesn't always mean darkening but it means making it less blurred. 07:53, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look too blurred, can you make them less blurred? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Pixlr crap and won't sharpen, if needed I will redraw those stripes //shot  11:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Redrew stripes, will fix them soon-  14:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the frontmost back leg. Please stop aligning your images.

Sorry, it looks really weird. I have to align it, it's the option? Now it's going > way, and really weird. Someone fix that please? Maybe a mod? Wow, this image is getting a lot of edits... Knowing my luck, within a week bam it'll be moved to declined. 18:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just remove the |thumb on the end. Anyway, the stripes are very blotchy, do you think you could thin them out and sharpen them a bit? And perhaps add more after that, since they're be thinner?

Reupload Redrew stripes. Right now I'm just waiting for it to be declined. 23:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay first, please stop saying that your image will be declined. You don't know this, and it could very well be approved like every other image on the approval page. It really seems like your trying to guilt trip us, honestly. Saying things like that will /not/ get your image approved faster. This image is very well done, so i see no reason why it shouldnt be approved at some point. As for the image, define the tail and foreleg shading please. 23:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Sorry, I didn't mean too... well, maybe I did, I'm a bit confused right now and I'll stop. Also, fixed the shading. I don't mean to guilt trip you guys, I'm...Not really good at control that stuff? I'll stop, promise. Fixed shading as well. 00:05, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink a bit more and smudge it a tad more. And like Breeze said, it is a wonderful image. I see nothing that'll make you think this will get declined. =) 06:13, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Just bumping OuO  12:25, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstar (MV) (L) - For Approval
shading black cats more like nope 00:56, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Please define the shading. 07:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (W) - For Approval
- she might fall more into the mottled category than speckled... but I think she looks cool 01:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead and... Define the light on the legs? 02:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be cloudy and blind, I would think. 11:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, that would probably be an alt- Longtail had the same thing happen and since it happened later, it would probably be better to have an alternate image of it once this gets approved. Percy is also the same way.

yeah i forgot about that whoops. maybe dull the earpink a ittle and define the haunch shading. 01:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reedshine (MV) (W) ~ For Approval
-cough- bae -cough- 02:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. 07:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main part of the body.

Can you make her darker please? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named File:Reedshine (MV).warrior.png, (I've renamed it for you, but keep this in mind for the future) as there's more than one Reedshine and we have no proof whatsoever that they're anywhere near the same cat.

Sorry, I forgot there were 2 Reedshines. 23:21, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make her a bit darker? Given that she's dark orange and all.

Blur the ear pink near the tip touching the fur? 12:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Swiftflight (W) ~ For Approval
Okay? Okay. 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC

Define the ear pink and lighten the shading just a few ticks.

Re-upped I was just doing that lol. Much, much happier 08:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit more? Nice. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 10:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

define the tail shading. 14:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The leg shading too^^ all 4. 06:08, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 07:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Beetail (D) ~ For Approval
DD 04:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

he looks ginger, can you make him a bit less orange? 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Much happier now. 07:48, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes a tad? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought it looked fine but whatever 10:19, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs a little? 10:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

What color are your pale parts? They look...kinda pink. Nevermind, that's my laptop- it's horribly miscalibrated right now.

Re-uploaded 12:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts do look kind of pink to me on my laptop, which is more reliable than my phone for colors and what I trust. Would you mind changing it a tad? 11:39 Wed Mar 25

Re-uploaded 11:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Splashfoot (W) ~ For Evaluation
My first charart, comments? Also, could someone tell me why this is coming out really small so I can fix it? 21:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Well firstly what program are you using, Icebreeze? 22:32, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

GIMP. 23:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, so maybe you're not making it full size. To do it, click on the blank on the charart page and click full size. Also, are you using layers? If not, make a layer and put the colors and add another layer for shading. Okay, so can you define the shading, please? 23:25, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for all the help, Tiger! Your suggestion about making it full size was very helpful, and I think I have a correctly sized blank now. Yes, I'm using layers, and I have defined my shading on my charart. I will re-upload tomorrow. Thanks again! =) 01:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The image needs to be bigger. It isn't the right size as the others. 03:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Anyways, why is the eye sort of... deformed? 08:35, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

It'll probably be fixed when they use the right size blank as they mentioned earlier. 11:37 Wed Mar 25

Deerdapple (W) ~ For Approval
Sweet 22:12, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Can you lighten the base color a bit, please? 22:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more 01:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define head shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 01:52, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Define the shape of the ear pink. I can kinda see it, but at the same time, I can't.

define the shading everywhere a tad 11:36 Wed Mar 25

Thrushtalon (W) ~ For Aproval
I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-; 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me. 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Spiketail (D) For Evaluation
Welp... first charart. Hopefully I don't chicken out or get arrogant and I didn't screw anything up /)-(\  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:45, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the pupils/eye color? I can't see any at all, and he needs to have them. Also, darken his base just a bit, and blur the main body shading a tad.

blur the shading a lot, and make the light on the bent leg more visible 11:35 Wed Mar 25

Eeltail (Warrior) - For Approval
Lil' Tabby 17:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a tad? Russettail13 (talk) 18:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet