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Graypaw - Withdrawn by User


Not my best image. I don't know why it's showing up black, could someone fix it for me?Minnowclaw 02:16, 25 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw


 * Did you save the thumbnail version because it looks a bit smaller than the full size image and it looks as if you saved it as the original jpg file. No problem since you have to get the regular size, save that lineart as png instead of jpg.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 05:13, 25 July 2009 (UTC)


 * I put it as png, but it's still black.Minnowclaw 14:50, 25 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It probably looked smaller as it was black, because it's the right size. I've changed the bg to transparent for you Minnow. On the image, he looks a bit pixelated on some parts of his pelt, maybe blur those parts. Otherwise, he's very good. -- Bramble My Realm 20:42, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble! Could you draw me a diagram so I know where I need to blur?Minnowclaw 22:57, 25 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

If it turns out we need one, I'll make a diagram, but I think I can explain it. Just the basic front side of his body; the chest, his face, the upper edge of his tail, his belly, his forelegs, and his hind leg haunch. It looks speckled, or pixelated in those areas. -- Bramble My Realm 02:10, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawing.Minnowclaw 16:49, 29 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Brook where small fish swim - Withdrawn by User


I don't know how to make a transparent background. Could a very kind person do this for me?Minnowclaw 02:38, 25 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Done :) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:18, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Thanks a bunch! Is there anything I can improve on Sandy?Minnowclaw 17:23, 25 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Yes, sorry. I didn't have time to comment properly earlier. Make the eye more orange as it's hard to distinguish it from her pelt right now. Also, the tabby markings are very scratchy. Try thickening them and making them slightly smoother. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:49, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Blend the tabby markings.  Jane Volturi ( talk! ) 19:59, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I thikened it the smallest bit ad it looked like this.Minnowclaw 23:13, 25 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The Tribe's pelts are streaked with mud. I think you shoud put in a few random lineish mud streaks (Make them lumpy, wavy, and irregular. Mud brown is a bit darker and not bright, but rather dull) -- Dawnfeather talk! 01:12, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Brook's eyes are gray, not amber. But anyway good looking image. Sand wich  989  07:53, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I think she looks good. Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 23:19, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

The eyes and mud streaks still need doing.. -- Dawnfeather talk! 23:56, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

You'd have permission to slap me if you met me in real life, Dawn. So sorry, was practically asleep on my paws when I wrote that... yes, fix the eyes and add mud streaks. Also, now I look again, there's a mark near the shoulder that looks like an upside down K. Change it so it looks more natural. -- Bramble My Realm 03:16, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawing.Minnowclaw 16:50, 29 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I'm sorry to see these withdrawn. They looked good. -- Bramble My Realm 00:35, 30 July 2009 (UTC)