Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Sol (Ro) ~ Redone
Okay, it needed to match it's loner image, and it was pretty much impossible to tweak and get a fine result, so I ended up redoing it with permission. I did redo it, more of a tweak, on the same image, but I'll say it was redone, 'cause that's how it was except on the same image. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 00:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

His muzzle shouldn't be black, and make the earpink a bit more triangular. :P Sky To Kill An Empire 00:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the white on the chest paws and belly. 00:11, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the earpink by any chance? 01:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also redid the whole image because it didn't match the loner. 05:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Add the tufted ears ^^ 17:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 18:53, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Crop it some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  00:15, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Crop what? If it's the tufted ears, it matches the other images. 02:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I meant crop it around the lineart. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  15:06, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the chest white parts a tad. 14:40, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Rowan, I'm not changing the white, 'cause since the light source is above, the light can't hit the white at all, so it's in the shadows, giving it a darker color. 02:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern doesn't really match the warrior image. There's too much black and the placement's a bit off. Could you try and match it? 16:06, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. L) - Redone
In all technicality, I went through the tweaking process with this, but nothing was really left unchanged in the end, so this'll be called redone. XD OA was Moonflight and shading needed to be redone. 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the --> leg and haunch shading. 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

It may just be my computer, but, he looks tinted blue...o3o <3   19:02, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred it to the max. And yeah, the highlights are tinted blue cause white highlights look awful on black cats in my opinion. 19:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him tinted a little less blue and more black? Sorry, but it looks kinda odd. He's smexy otherwise, though<3 20:59, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading as it is looks fine, but I do think you could smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. 01:04 Sun Feb 19

It's not fine...he looks blue. Black and blue are two totally different colors. If anything, just make it so the highlighted areas don't look dark blue. =P 01:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think Paleh can choose if she wants to change it, but in the defense of blue-tinted highlights, they do look much better, and more natural than white highlights. It's not like the picture is Bluestar's kind of blue :P 01:15 Sun Feb 19

Reuploaded - Well since I still don't wanna put white highlights on him, I desaturated them a bit, but they're still blue tinted. Is this better? 03:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, much better. If he were any bluer, I'd have voted to have his name changed to Bluestar. XDDDD 03:38, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the pelt more into the ear? 03:59 Sun Feb 19

Can you define the tail shading a bit moar C: 16:55, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. 19:03, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (W) ~ Redone
Hope this is okay.. It was very fun making him. xD And thank you for Stoney who let me borrow the xcf. file ^^ Had to be redone to match deputy image, and since it was a triangular tabby. OA was Goldenpaw, I think... 20:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Very pretty Misty ^^ Enlarge the earpink a little. 20:29, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Upload it under File:Sharpclaw (SC).warrior.png ,20:30,February 19,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Knew I got the file name wrong or something.. >.< Renamed it and enlarged the earpink. Thanks Mountain. ^^ 20:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should darken the shading, it looks a little light next to the deputy image. Sky Everyone likez teh cats 02:32, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for such a late upload.. x.x Darkened the shading. 22:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Slightly shrink the earpink. :3 06:58, 23, 02, 2012

Reuploaded Sorry for the late upload, I was away... 20:56, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Ki) - Redone
M'kay, needed to be redone to match the deputy image. Original artist was moi. Kits are soo small! Dx 02:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

He's so cute! Spread the stripes out more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  03:34, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose pink like the kittypet and rogue images. 15:10, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

The nose pink is fine since the rogue and kittypet are going to be redone. Blur the earpink a tad. So cute! ^^ 16:54, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white pixels in the eyes....white. XD Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 12:12, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:51, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give him the slightly lighter chest & muzzle like in his other images? Elork  13:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken the stripes just a tad to match the other images? 00:27, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W) - Redone
Okay, Willowclaw. OA was Bramble, then Sky. Was redone due to shading. :3 Comments? 17:46, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink a but. 17:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, but? You may have been on that site too much xD Blur the shading and maje the earpink less red. Ugh, Willowclaw. I hated that redo xD Sky Everyone likez teh cats 05:08, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Maje? Sky, you've got it too. :3 Anyways, Reuploaded. 23:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit~ ☾ ~Pouncey~ ☽ 04:14, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 20:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Percy (Ro) - Redone
OA was Cherryfur123. I reserved this before the tweak/redo nominations thing passed. I feel that the stripes looked kind of odd and the shading was weak, and I got permission, but if enough don't agree, then just decline this because I don't want people fighting. Image not showing. Pattern is based off my real cat so I'm not changing the pattern. 02:07, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hickory!!! <33 Can you make the earpink more red? :3 You're fine Ivy. 02:09, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little? Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 12:10, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded You got it right, that's who this is ^^ 05:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink where it's smudged. 07:01, 23, 02, 2012

Hickory!! <3 You finally made him! ^^ Anyways, blur the earpink all around actually, and define the shading a bit. 18:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded :)  23:55, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste :P gorgeous, Ivy. 01:54 Fri Feb 24

Reuploaded   15:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brightsky (W) - Redone
Alright... original artist was Nightflower, with a couple of tweaks by Elorisa, and then Scarletwind taking over, and the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 18:40, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Sky Promises, promises 13:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and can you change back the foot lineart? Elork  13:35, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is the paw lineart thick enough? 18:33, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

It's not about it being thick, it's about it not being changed at all. Just paste the old lineart over it, unedited. And blur the ginger on the ear, and possibly get rid of the patch on the whiskers, or make it bigger. It seems a bit out of place since it's just inbetween the whiskers. 20:06, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like part of the patch on the head (that goes over the eye) isn't smudged.. Can you fix that? 22:23, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I utterly loathe the paw lineart. It looks too blocky. 00:28, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The ginger on the ear still seems a bit hard edged (it's probably just cause the earpink's over it, but it still needs to be fixed) and the paw lineart's not the same. While I agree it's a bit blocky, you can't just change it whenever you like. Suggest it to be tweaked if it bothers you that much, but you're not allowed to just change it on a whim. Please fix it. 18:36, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I believe it looked like this. 21:18, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Ki) ~ Redone
It needed to be redone to match the other images. OA was Mosspath. Torties x.x *dies* You might need to check file history. Comments? 03:27, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 04:56, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:59, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Although it's minor, shrink the earpink? 07:06, 23, 02, 2012

Re-uploaded 23:42, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (A) ~ Redone
Had to be redone to match the other images. Comments? 14:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful Shelly. Define the depth in the eyes. 14:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and the tail. Fenris They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 16:39, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:28, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose(MC) ~ Redone


Was told to redo. Ew...Comments?... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons, and make the ear pink bigger. 02:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, the patches... Try looking at Spiderstar for what patches ought to look like on short-furred cats. And could you go back to the old pattern? I'd rather not have to redo the MCA unless absolutely necessary. 02:29, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, define the shading so it actually shows up on the white, please. 02:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please go back to the old pattern. Redoing doesn't necessarily mean changing the pattern. There's no reason to redo his other images. Anyways, darken the gray to match and darken the shading all together. 18:30, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, me and another SM chat (not gonna mention names unless she tells me to) think this should be auto-declined, as it's not 80% complete. 20:25, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

It's at least over 50%. Maple, you have a week from the upload date (2:08 AM Wikitime on the 23rd) to get this over 80% before it's declined. 21:45, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maple, are you working on this or not? 04:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lightningpelt (W) - Redone
It was on the redo list. I just redid the stripes, but I suppose that counts and a redo since it's half the charart. OA was Sandy, if memory serves Hawkfire, then I redid it. Comments? 02:43, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Aw man I wanted this ;) This is totally beautiful <33 Lighten the shading a tad. 02:46, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye Sir! 02:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

That's one heck of a skunk stripe. XD Could you continue the stripe down her tail? It doesn't make much sense to stop there (not that it makes much sense anyway, skunk stripes are super rare) 02:50, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. <3333 05:00, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Redone
I've always wanted to put this up. Original artist was Sparrowsong, with Bramble taking over, then Icestorm/Appledash redoing it, then redone by Frostheart which was declined, and then Rainfacestar took over, but she withdrew it. His stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 18:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ooooh, Lovely! ^^ Just blur and center the earpink and fix the paws and it'll be perfect. :) 18:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also define the shading a little? This is phenominal, great job! 19:07, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad (along with that Ivy said). This is amazing... I love it. Job well done. =) 19:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ... :')! 21:12, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry - and this is a beautiful image - but since I nominated him, don't I have claim to his images? I had an idea of what I wanted to do for his warrior, but I wasn't sure if we were going to redo him completely, so I held off until I was sure. This probably sounds really selfish of me, but could I please take over this image? You could do his apprentice or kit if you wanted to. 21:53, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think that rule has been integrated yet. 22:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

While it may not be a "rule", it's still common courtesy; since it was my idea, I thought I would get claim to it. You don't have to give it to me, but it would be much appreciated. 22:56, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'd rather keep this, since I really like it. You could do one of his other images. 23:19, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more 02:28, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and define the shading. 02:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:38, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He looks really green; make him more brown. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 03:24, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (H) - Tweaked
OAs for this were Night Shine with a redo by Rainlegs. He needed mud but I also tried making him look skinny with wiry muscles. If that doesn't work out I can always remove it. I tried something new with the mud :3 And I'm sorry to Wildfire for stealing this :C 00:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the bit of static in the top right corner. 00:17, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mud. Also, I fixed the heading for you. 00:19, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Aw I'm fine, you did a good job (better than I would've) and that's all that matters. Add mud to the tail and paws. 00:56, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lionheart (D) ~ Redone
OA was Icecloud33 and the amazing lineart was done by Loonie Triangle tabby and blotchy shading. Comments? 02:49, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes on the ruff curve to add depth? 03:12, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  03:31, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner and paler? c: Sky Promises, promises 04:51, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Well finally this thing re-uploads >.< *mountainranges* 05:53, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

A stripe can be seen from underneath the ear, so fix that. 00:10, 25, 02, 2012

Re-uploaded 00:21, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. >83 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  01:18, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:31, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Redone
First elder for me. ._. 03:06, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 03:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad and make it more triangular. c: If ya use highlights, tone them down a tad, otherwise just blur the shading like Cloudy said. *Is stupid Dx* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  06:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewfoot (W) - Redone
Her shading and stuff was blotchy. OA was Mousetalon. 12:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the paws, they look grey instead of black. 20:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading. Fenris They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 01:46, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:27, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneteller (OTS) - Tweaked
Needed mud, and as you can see, I was peer pressured into giving him a lot. >.> OA was Moonflight, with a redo by Iceheart. 12:11, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give hiom a little less mud? He looks like a brown and black cat...D8  Elork   13:37, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Nah, you can clearly tell he's black, but, I do advise defining the mud so you can tell the difference. I didn't notice it until now, actually...otherwise, I'd have told you on join.me. XD 18:54, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. He really likes mud baths. 17:07, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (W) - Tweaked
I blurred and thickened stripes, OA is Sandstar12, redo by Icestorm123. I like this one. ,13:17,February 24,2012 (UTC)

Ahhh~! This is so pretty <3. Make the earpink more red and less gray. Elork  13:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,15:44,February 24,2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the haunch shading. 17:18, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,10:26,February 25,2012 (UTC)

Heavystep (E) - Redone
I love Heavystep the Undying. <3 Redone to match his warrior as the old ones were triangle tabbies. Original artist was Blackclaw09. Breeze whisker  00:59, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Aha, so you finally got it done 8D Is it me or are the stripes lighter then the ones on the warrior? Eh, maybe not 02:30, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 18:56, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Larksong (E) - Redone
As Shelly said, she looked like play-doh. OA was Echomist, with a tweak by Dapplecloud33. 02:46, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the tail fur to go in the direction actual fur would go? *steals Larky* <3 02:48, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 02:54, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more red; also center and enlargen it. Fenris They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 16:39, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think the color's fine. However, I did try and center it. Re-uploaded. 18:56, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

It looks alright to me too, but make it slightly bigger? c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  22:16, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 22:22, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (A) - Tweaked
I edited stripes at same way as warriors. OA is Maplefern and Mountainheart redoned it. ,16:26,February 25,2012 (UTC)

My first image *cries* just kidding XD Darken the shading a little. 16:35, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the front leg and face, they get lots in the pelt color. Fenris They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 16:37, February 25, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded. ,20:11,February 25,2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match the rest of the images. Comments? 18:57, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink unless it matches with the MCA. <3 19:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 02:31, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (W) ~ Tweaked
Blurred the highlights, fixed blurred lineart, and eye wasn't in depth. OA was Ashshadow with a tweak from Atelda, I think. (This is my first tweak so please tell me if I'm doing this right.) 19:12, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around. 01:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:59, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Also, I fixed the heading for you. 02:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't match his description at the moment. It says he's a dark grey tom, and now he looks like a light grey one. :3 When I nominated it, I was told to redo the colour too. 02:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
I swear to StarClan this is tweaked. It was a pain in the tush. Rainly can vouch for it, since she watched me on join.me. OA is Splook, and it needed the shading/highlights blended. 21:08, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Wanna blur the tail shading/highlight/whatever? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 22:15, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There's only so much I can do with this without re-doing it. xD 22:24, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (W) - Redone
Modified triangle tabby or something. x.x OA = Ashshadow with a tweak by Sweetflower. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  03:33, February 26, 2012 (UTC)