Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Snaketooth (W) - Redone
Yay, new tabby style. Original artist was Mousetalon, and I redid him to be longhaired. 17:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Darken the stripes ever so slightly and make the earpink more triangular. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:29, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

They eyes are too neon. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 17:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the tail tip, ear-tip, and bottom chest fur. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 19:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did I get them all? 00:59, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

it says he broke his foot, and may not be able to hunt and fight again, maybe twist one of his feet? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not so sure though... 20:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular. 22:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't add a broken leg yet. And the earpink is triangular enough I guess... 23:41, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it blends in to the pelt too much. 22:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:27, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Larkwing (MC) ~ Redone
Original artist was Dawnfeather; redone as a shorthair. Comments? 22:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Do you think you could add a stripes in the area that's above her belly and in between her front arm and hanch? Also, there's a few miscolored pixils below her whiskers that are colored green. 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 22:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Ivystripe, but I couldn't add another stripe without ruining the shading, so I just made the other stripe longer. 23:06, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be more silver. Just seems like dark gray tabby right now. 23:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add a couple more stripes as well. 00:24, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Add shading to the herbs. 01:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes towards the base. It looks odd being blurred at the tips, but not quite as blurry at the base of the lineart. 20:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. Looks good Mistystar! :D 11:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe...sorry, but this already went through 36 hours without comments. Re-Uploaded, can this be archived? 21:51, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know, I'm very, very impatient. But, can someone archive this? ;D 23:07, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's not ready. I don't like how the stripes fade out and add a lot more stripes. 23:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I added stripes before, but cats don't necessarily have that many stripes. Besides, other chararts that didn't look ready were approved before just for going through 24 hours, so I don't see why this one shouldn't. Not everyone has the same artistic views...I'll try to add more stripes, but I like it with the stripes fading out. 23:14, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

There, add a lot more stripes. Does it look better now? 23:23, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the pixels of stripes that...aren't stripes. 00:28, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What's a stripe that isn't a stripe? Can you add a redline or something? 00:31, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was hard to understand. What I meant to say was that there were black pixels that went into the pelt color - could you erase those? 00:33, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, thats a lot easier to understand. xD 00:37, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes may not be showing. 00:39, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Now darken the shading. After you do that, I'll archive this. 19:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.' 23:29, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and blur the earpink. Other than that, I see nothing wrong. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 16:11, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Patchpelt (E) ~ Tweaked
Shading tweak. Original artist is Icethroat. Also, I've blurred as much as GIMP'll let me. 02:24, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the patches in the fuzzy style? Blur the shading at the base of the tail and make the ear-pink less purplish. 03:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks like that because of the shading. You know what, is anyone going to get offended if I re-do it? I promise I'll do all of the others as well. I kinda want to smudge the patches. 03:27, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and smudge the patches =) 03:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, awesome! Thanks! 03:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I say go ahead and redo it. XD It'll probably look better. I think most things look better redone, because it can be really hard to JUST tweak things without making them look worse sometimes. But yeah, I say redo it. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it now. I'll then re-do the others as well. 04:05, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Here's the horrid re-do. If this doesn't work out, I'll just go back to tweaking the other. Reuploaded. 04:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the black a teeny tiny bit, and something looks odd about the direction the furs smudged in. Maybe make it follow more of the direction fur would go on a real cat? If that makes any sense. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:32, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nah. I'll just work with the other one. There was really nothing wrong with the patches on this one anyways. I did fix the ear pink, however. 05:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading needs blurring. 21:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:50, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Olivenose (W) - Redone
I've decided I seriously need some more practice on Tortoiseshells so I decided to do Olivenose's image. XD Anyways, OA was Mousetalon, and the shading needed to be tweaked, and the patches needed to be redone to look more natural. PLEASE don't comment telling me to make the white lighter, it's only dark cause of the shading, it's actually pure white underneath it all and if I lighten the shading it will look flat. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:07, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

O.O .....make the ear pink a tad bigger.... HOLY CRAP DID YOU MAKE THIS?! 04:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. And yes I made this. I know. It's horrible. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:36, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just the opposite. I think Iceheart should watch her back. You're really good with this stuff. Blur the tip of the ear pink a bit more. 04:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Pssssssh, you can't even COMPARE me with Iceheart. She's way too epic for me to be compared to her. And yes, this IS horrible. I can't really do Tortoiseshells.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh PLEASE Paleh. You're torties are EPIC! Even your ugliest tortie would be pretty! 10:32, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I call sdoing the apprentice image. It probably won't be as good next to yours, Pale. xD This is PRETTY! I literally see nothing wrong with this. 11:50, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

This looks'' beautiful. ''How the heck did you MAKE this?? Silverflower  ...the flower of the heart 13:17, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Awwwww *blushes* Though I still think this is horrible, thanks guys. XD And alrighty Icestorm! ^^ I originally considered doing her apprentice image too, but then I made it, and it turned out worse than this. XD Like WAY worse. So I got rid of it. :P So it's fine by me. XD Wow, three comments and nothing wrong with it. o.o ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is gawjus! On her apprentice image she had a white tail tip, so add that :) 21:15, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, too. :D 21:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - This image doesn't have to match her apprentice image at all. The apprentice image is being redone too, and since I redid this completely, it doesn't really have to match anything. But I reddened the earpink. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:05, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the paws? they look really dark. Its probably the shading, but its hard to tell that its white. 22:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Wow, I just realized how dark the paws really were. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:06, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ikr? xD The back hind paw still is a bit too gray, lighten that as well. 00:29, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:52, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the ginger patches more ginger? And blur the patches. This is awesome, much better than Blossomfall. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:08, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

They don't hae to be bright ginger, I've seen plenty of tortoiseshells with these colors, and personally, I like those ones a LOT more than the ones with actually bright ginger. So I'm gonna keep it as is if that's Ok. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:31, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Paleh, this is stunning! I see nothing wrong with this. Iceheart, watch your back, Plaeclaw might beat chu at torites.

Ok, but can you blur the smudging some? ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 16:10, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrykit ~ Tweaked


I actually had fun making this! Anyways, she needed stripes cuz she's ginger. OA is Mistyheart. Comments? 10:58, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stiripes a lot. I had a hard time seeing this - but I like the style you made. Pretty. 11:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also define the shading. It looks cute, Rainwillow ;3 20:21, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great job, Rainey! Darken the stripes, add stripes to the head. 21:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Put more stripes on the side of the head. Awesome! 23:43, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I actually like the kit blank now.... :P 09:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lionblaze (W) - Tweaked
I just darkened the shading and re-did the stripes so it could match his apprentice image. Comments? 20:16, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, Lovely! Thicken the stripes on the tail a tad and redden the earpink. Looks great :D 20:19, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I didn't thicken the stripes because they're thin on the apprentice image. 21:47, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the original artist? xD Technically, the apprentice image should have been changed to match this, since this was redone first, but whatever. Darken the tail shading. 21:53, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look odd, brown against golden. And the leg stripes get lost in the shading. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Mintstar, they're a darker golden. Not brown. I darkened the leg stripes and the shading. 22:02, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, OA was you, Misty =) 22:04, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, but don't make it too dark. 23:25, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

It becomes dark when I do. 00:27, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he's golden, so it should be lighter, because it looks a bit brown, but the shading still needs to be defined more. 00:28, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I lightened him, is this better? 00:43, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you're redoing the stripes to match his apprentice image, shouldn't they match in color too? It's a LOT darker on this image than on his apprentice one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:36, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's fine - I like the style and how it looks - cats usually have much darker stripes, and Lionblaze isn't described with faint tabby markings. But if more users think I should change it, then I will. 16:50, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

If we're going for consitancy, you lighten them. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  16:53, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) - Redone
Redone as shorthair. I'm pretty proud how this came out ^.^ OA was Insaneular. Comments? 21:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Splashpelt! Define the earpink. 21:13, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is good. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:45, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, lighten the earpink, darken the shadingo n the tail, blur the lighter part of the chest. 21:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC

Reuploaded. Thanks everyone :) 00:56, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make sure that the stripes on his chest go all the way to the lineart, or is it supposed to be like that? Darken teh stripes on the ears and forehead. 00:20, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) - Redone
I think it's too smudged. It needed petal shaped patches, and I redid the coloring so it didn't look multi-colored instead of tortoiseshell. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, the orignal artist was Icestorm. You don't mind if I continue to work on this Icestorm do you? ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well....I didn't see the problem before.... 21:52, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

If you mean the original image by "before" it was on the tweak list for petal shaped patches. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

It is. Lighten the shading, and blur the patches. 21:56, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but did it really require to be re-done? 21:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- no, but adding the patches would've meant adding shading and highlights, and they were all around. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add a pixel for her eye color below her white. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sucks to have your images randomly redone doesnt it Icy? Make the yellow more ginger. 23:14, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white chest, it's starting to look grayish. 23:41, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, it looks better than my first image anyways. I just wanted to know why, I didn't see it on the Tweak List. xD 00:26, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, that was uncalled for. Also, Icestorm, it's been on the tweaking list for a while now. Lighten the shading/darken it so all the white fur matches. It seems the feet are lighter then everything else. 13:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't check xD Darken the shading 19:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I really suck at tortoiseshells XP. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:05, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make it a bit more red? The yellow i mean. 00:30, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks really awesome! Blur the ear pink a tad bit more. 02:40, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- does the orange look okay? I had to make sure the sponge didn't saturate anything else. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 16:07, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Tweaked
Original artist was Elorisa. I basically just darkened the stripes and the shading. Comments? 22:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could basically re-do the stripes? They're bothering me. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then that would basically be redoing the whole thing, right? ... and darken the tail shading. 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Um, no, it would just be re-doing the stripes... 00:25, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

But redoing the stripes would mean erasing the stripes, and then adding stripes, and adding shading again, even if you used layers, the shading would have to be redone...whatever. 00:27, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What's with all the hostility lately? Define the shading a little more. 00:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Then the shading could be re-done, if possible. 00:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me :). But I'm not much help with this, I'm the original artist xD. Lighten the stripes a tad, they seem really dark :3. Looks great, Dapplecloud! Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, can you make that large circly stripe on the chest less circlish? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower (E)- Redone
Comments? OA was Sandstar and tweaked by Bramble. -- 23:20, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink more, and darken the shading. Looks fantastic! 23:24, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also, lighten the brown/ginger/whatever color they are a bit. They're a bit darker than her Warrior and Queen image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:23, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 00:03, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the dark brown ear and the shading under the muzzle. 01:15, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (W)- Tweaked


Here he is, Clawface was approved, so i took him over, OA was Maplefern, and I made him more mottled, cause, his 'mottles' looked liked shading done wrong. So comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:25, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Looks a lot better. Blur the shading, add shading to the head, and redden the earpink. 23:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the dark lines by the lineart. 23:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- What else, Thanks, Misty :) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail some more? 23:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- anything else? I am really fond of this image ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:02, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading. 00:11, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I lightend the shading a touch, then blurred, what else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:38, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Look at the front legs... is it me, or do they look a little...awkward? It seems there's some misplaced colour or something? I have no idea, but, it just seems weird. 13:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Did i fix it?.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Still a little bit on the front paw, but, I won't complain. It looks much better now. 22:46, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. It makes him look almost black. 03:35, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! I've been waiting so long for this image to be fixed! Maybe add a little dark gray or a mottle to his ear farthest away from us, it looks bare and plain. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫  12:23, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (W)~ For Approval
I <3 her. Anyway, I'm not sure who the original artist was, but her stripes, shading, and pupils needed to be re-done. Comments? 03:37, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! But as much as I love the classic tabby kind of style, do those count as stripes? *isn't sure* cause she wasn't just mentioned as a tabby, she was mentioned specifically with STRIPES. So would a classic tabby count for that? Anyways, the stripes need to be lightened since they're supposed to be barely visible. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:43, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Gingers are tabbies though...and it didn't specify how many she actually had so.... Anyway, there seems to be a bit of smudged lineart above the earpink. She's so adorabl;e though...*steals* Sky- The evil juggler! 04:09, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

She has "barely visible stripes". BEAUTIFUL! Can you just lighten them a tad? Wow, Rainy! I LOVE this. 12:08, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

I love how you do these tabby patterns! They're beautiful! Define the shading just a little :3 19:45, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Rainlegs. :) Hm, make the earpink a bit less purplish, and I think there is some blurred lineart near the tip of the tail. Shadewing  Blades of the Night  21:33, September 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadeiwng

Reuploaded. Gracias. :) 00:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail and blur all of them a tad. This is beautiful, Rainy! ;) 00:26, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! I think she was worth an hour's work... ;) 00:34, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

No words for this. Blur the earpink a bit more. 00:42, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is it weird to watch the recent activity page and wait for someone to comment? xD 00:44, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look.....odd....Like near the stripes? that is what i mean Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:45, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, what do you want me to do about? Please be a bit more clear. 00:46, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur them, or sumge them. It just looks pixelated Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 01:17, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:34, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (A) - Redone
Haha, another ginger and white. Well, Brightheart's my favorite. Redone as a longhair. OA was Sandy and then was tweaked by Goldepaw and me. Comments? 03:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Can you define the earpink a tad? It's a little hard to see. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 21:36, September 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 23:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some. 00:29, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (KP) - Redone
Finally got batteries for my mouse, so I can work on this! Original artist was Nightshine. He needed to match his leader version. Comments for improvement? 03:03, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I died from awesomeness. 8D define the earpink and blur the pale belly -- 03:06, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the back again. I died from the awesomeness. I'm now a ghost. 03:07, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to say define the shading on the tail too. Imma ghost too, BOO -- 03:09, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and thanks, really x3 The last comment I didn't get before I reuploaded, so hang on Done 03:11, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's some gray below the base of the tail. Nvm. 03:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and make the nose the same color as it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:08, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

All the colors were taken from his leader image. 04:28, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, alright then. Just center the earpink then. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:58, September 17, 2011 (UTC)