Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Brackenfur (W) ~ Redone
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar. 05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D 19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should be shorter; it doesn't go all the way to his underarm. It's just on his flank. 20:50, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? 00:41, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Possibly thicken the stripes a bit? 01:14 Sat Feb 4

Make the earpink a bit bigger too. 01:18 Sat Feb 4

Make the scar a bit thicker. 03:55, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, i think the ear-pink is fine and for the stripes, they are the same thickness as the other ones. Other then that, comments? 18:27, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please make the earpink a bit bigger and define it? Also move it into the ear more. 19:13 Sun Feb 5

Blur the shading too. 23:34 Sun Feb 5

The stripes may be the same thickness as his kit charart, but this isn't a kit. As he grew, his stripes naturally grew as well to be proportional to his body size. On that note, the apprentice charart should be tweaked as well. 04:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading looks... odd, i'm trying to fix that, don't worry. 21:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That's because it's dark. Lighten it, pleeease. :P 21:20, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stupid shading Why must it be so irritating? Comments? 21:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading a little more. And where is the light source? I can't find one. 22:46, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 00:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten or blur the shading, and define the earpink. Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes and change the color of the scar to something a bit more different from the stripes, I almost told you to get rid of the extra ginger stripe on the flank. XD 15:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes some more. 22:50, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

... Okay, I'm sorry, but this just doesn't feel like Brackenfur. Can we do an overhaul on the image and make it a redo?-- 23:55, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ Tweaked
Angry pregnant Yellowfang judges you. Anyway, made the muzzle match the fabulous apprentice image. Comments? 04:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is a bit of extra lineart sticking out on the left side (our left) of her chin. This is pretty epic Shellyward XP 04:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail? I don't want to get judged 3: Especially by an angry pregnant Yellowfang... 23:59, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang! Darken the shading on the farthest(?) leg and the bottom of the chest. 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is a tweak, not a redo. I only did this for the muzzle, guys. 16:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

They're not telling you to redo this... 18:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

And this will only be tweaked later for the shading if you don't tweak i now. why not tweak it while it's up? Yes, you may have just done it for the muzzle, but that doesn't mean other things couldn't be changed. And thin out the line for the muzzle a bit. It's a lot thinner on her other images and look kinda out of place here being so thick. 20:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the line coming from the nose on the right a bit smaller? 00:50 Tue Feb 7

Which one? 00:51, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Since she said Right, I'm assuming she meant our right, not Yellowfangs. 09:01, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but did she mean the mouth, or the crease in her face? 14:08, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

She meant the mouth. 02:24, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

The crease in the face, sorry :P 02:30 Fri Feb 10

The crease is only one pixel thick... I really can't thin it further. 02:32, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

** Shorter, not smaller. 02:33 Fri Feb 10

Re-uploaded. 02:36, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shadepelt (W) ~ Tweaked
I really love tweaking shading. And I have Shadepelt yet again. XD OA was Mousetalon. I'm worried I made her too dark. Breeze whisker  06:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Waste in between the legs. ;3 Sky Dovahjerk 10:47, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks very blotchy, try to blur it a lot. If that doesn't work, you probably have to redo the shading. 14:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bit bigger. 14:34, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading alittle bit under the chin. -Bloo no logged

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  20:25, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur shadings some more. 00:55, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Make the earpink bigger. 01:06 Sat Feb 4

There's some waste between the legs. 20:56, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Breeze  whisker  18:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 06:36, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Go nuts on blurring the shading. o3o Sky Dovahjerk  07:23, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading is blurred enough. Darken it under the chin and that spot between the haunch and the front legs 23:37, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading could use a little blurring, but don't over-do it. It's not smooth enough, if you ask me. But, to each their own, I guess. 08:23, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

That is as blurred as I am willing to go. I like well-defined shading. Breeze whisker  22:22, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I forgot to say I reuploaded this. Breeze whisker  02:54, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudtail (KP) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow, and he needed his collar removed. No reference ftw. 21:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and foreleg C:  Elork   23:05, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the eyes 8D 23:07, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and define the tail shading too. 23:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I made it worse ._. 02:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

It looks fine, Oblivion. Just blur the shading on the haunch and shoulder a wittle more. :3 15:40, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:42, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Towards the bottom of the ear it is lighter than the rest. Blur that part or fix it. 08:41, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

Blur the tail shading and lighten it more. <span style="">18:57 Sun Feb 5

Re-uploaded. Also, DJ, what are you talking about? Both ears are the same colour all the way through. 23:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I ment earpink. >.< <span style="">06:40, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

I thought that too, but then I realized the earpink is also the same colour. I don't know what image you're looking at, but it's fine to me. 20:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please blur all the shading some more? 21:14, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Towards the bottom of the earpink on the cat's right ear, in the bottom left corner (our left) and around it, the earpink is more lighter than the rest of it. Here is the example of where it is. The blue circle is the lighter earpink. I sure I'm looking at the right image, and I can definatly see it's a different color. You might not tell because of the blue line. :/ Meh <span style="">10:13, Tue, Feb, 7, 2012

That's just the blurring DJ. Could you dull the earpink a bit and brighten the nose? 09:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:25, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I'm a fail. DX Anyways slightly blur the shading? <span style="">06:35, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Brokenstar (W) - Redone
Finally a space! Needed to match Leader image. OA was Elorisa. Comments? :) 09:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is way better than mine was <3. Define the earpink a tad C:  Elork   14:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the break more dramatic looking, like it is on his apprentice charart. It is described as looking like a broken twig, after all, and here it just looks like he's rather pleased with something (must have killed another apprentice). 04:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I had some trouble with the tail, any chance of a redline? Every way I did it it just looked curled... 06:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I can try giving you one ^^ 23:42, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That'd be great if you could. 08:58, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Here, I got this. http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120209051817!Shellyheart.png Make sure the fur just out on the outside of the break. 05:19, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Duskfur (W) ~ Redone
Sky, don't say mine is better, because it isn't. OA was Sandstar12 Comments? 13:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You shoulda known that comment would attract me like a moth to a flame, even if I didn't see it yet. :P Make the pale bits paler, and thicken up the stripes a bit. And maybe enlarge the earpink a tad while you're at it. P.S, this is better...>8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 13:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this one D: Anyone can take over. I feel so bad for withdrawing this one 8c 21:20, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over? :( So sad, such a nice image. 21:22, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Shamed. I've shamed Skt's beautiful pattern. D: 00:00, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

So much better than mine <3 Add that stripe on her cheek, 00:02, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I believe yours was better, Silver. <3 00:06, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, you and Silver brought much honour to it. :P Make the underparts brighter and more creamier brown. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 00:06, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - yes, Silver did. I didn't. I bash myself too much. :P  00:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink a bit. 00:20, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Your's is better >_> Stop putting yourself down. Make the pale parts paler. 00:24, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:45, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (L) ~ Tweaked
The OA was some user named *Wildfire* :P shading needed to be tweaked. 16:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh yeah, whoever is that user. XP Naw. This looks nice. Could you perhaps darken the shading a tad? But, if it's fine, that's alright. ;) 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:24, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. Nice.<span style="">05:22, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Fuzz (KP) - Tweaked
Honestly, that eyes are horrible. Anyway, i made bell on the collar (next horrible one) and fluffy tail to match description, i can try add the "long feathery fur" if someone will want it. OA is Evanphoto, redone by Atelda. He looks funny xD ,19:19,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - edited eyes ,19:29,February 5,2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes only need to be edited if it's a very prominent trait, like on Owleyes/star whatever his name was, he was named after it, so it was prominent. But otherwise, they should stay the same. :P And I can't find the changes. DX 06:15, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 07:17, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

changes arent showing ,16:40,February 6,2012 (UTC)

Actually I think the tail is good as it is, since on the longhair blank the tail's already fluffy :I -Bloo not logged.

Gotta agree with Bloo here...anyway, blur the back shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 14:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I like the tail. xD Can you define the ear pink? 20:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded ,15:02,February 9,2012 (UTC)

Lilyfur (Q) - Tweaked
This is bad! Original artist (am I the only one who still says "Original artist"?) was Echomist, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 20:09, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded without anyone telling me to I redid the shading again. 20:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Bkur the shading a bit more. 20:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple. 20:33, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded 18:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. :3  21:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also darkened it. 00:11, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's a thin line of waste on the bottom of the image. 02:29, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nvm, the changes weren't showing. Sorry 'bout that. 02:29, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandy with a very slight tweak by Icey. I had permission to redo this, as the shading needed to be darkened, wrong shading placement, and the colors were wrong, along with some blurred lineart. I was told to keep the same style. Comments? 20:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is really good. Blur/smudge the stripes on the chest area a tad bit. 166.249.107.125 20:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

^that was me^. Forgot to sign in. 20:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Like this? ^^ Hope changes are showing... 20:23, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make him less greenish and more brown. 23:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. :D <span style="">23:33 Sun Feb 5

Could you tweak the stripe on his face? It looks more like a tattoo (you know, one of those tattoos from Yu-Gi-Oh that all the badies seem to have) than a stripe. 04:14, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I want only ask.. because this is beatiful, are we going to redone his apprentice charart too? (oh bad question) and may I do it, since Im OA? 17:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, go for it. 17:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely Wifband <333 Define the tail shading a bit. 00:25, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the legs, makes it look like they're darker, like Brackenfoot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:55, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 03:36, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Still, make him more brown. 18:10, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
Tail needed to be longer. OAs are Bramble, Windwatcher, Mousetalon, Mintstar, Cloudskye, Shellheart, Icestorm123, and Paleclaw. Comments? 00:37, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Theres a spike on the far right side of the tail, second from the bottom, thats sort of square shaped. Could you make it more spiky? Great job ^^ 00:44, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:49, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't believe we're tweaking things like long tails unless it's a prominent feature, like with Tallstar. If we are, then there's a lot of images we have to tweak. But I'm pretty sure it was decided we're only gonna tweak ones where the tail is where it's either very often mentioned, or the character is named after it or something. Sorry. And also, I didn't actually tweak, I just reverted. XD 02:32, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I just went with what was said on the tweak page... Why don't we let Thistleclaw's be the last one? I know I'm not a SM, but it wouldn't hurt to let this one be the last. 12:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

But then we'd be being inconsistent with who gets one and who doesn't. It'd mean we'd have to give one to every cat who was described with a long tail. 13:19, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Two things: one, I wasn't an artist. I just moved the file. Second, I think the tail shouldn't be tweaked. Characters who do have them tweaked are ones for which they're known for, like Tallstar or Aspentail. Thistleclaw is different. If we tweak some and not others, we'd be inconsistent, as Paleh said. 20:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

So...what's going to be done here? Should this just be reverted and declined? 19:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I think. However, let's see what the other users have to say about it. 20:37, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) ~ Tweaked
And here's his apprentice :3 His tail needed to be longer, and I saw a bit of blurred lineart so I decided to fix that too. OAs were Sandstar12, Goldenpaw, ~Rainwhisper~, and Mountainheart :3 00:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think we're going to be tweaking the tails, as discussed above. However, if there's some other issue with the image, like blurred lineart, feel free to fix/comment on it. 20:15, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the needing tweaks list, though. 03:27, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind. 03:28, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't he have one lighter leg/paw? *is derp* Kill me if I'm wrong. 19:05, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think he does. 19:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think you may be thinking of his manga image. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (Ki) ~ Redone
Well, permission to redo the shading, after Cloudy found out about it, from Cloudy on chat. The lineart also looked blurred. OA = Sandstar with a tweak/redo by Bloo. Comments for imrpovement? 20:09, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad. This is wonderful, Rain. 20:11, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ew on ear-pink, i'll fix it if it is commented on. And thanks Cloudy ^.^ 20:31, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and nose colour. 21:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:16, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that chest highlink/shading a bit please. <span style="">06:41, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Re-uploaded. 19:33, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (D) ~ Redone
Had permission to redo. Reason was: Blotchy highlights, earpink, and a triangle tabby. I don't know who the OA was, as Oblivion renamed the file. Comments? 03:23, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely job dear! ^^ Make the eaprink stand out a bit more. 09:06, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (W) ~ Redone
Okay. There were so many issues with the other image, that it begged to be redone (again). I think the OA is Bluestar, but, I ended up re-doing it. xD 03:39, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and define the eye depth. Lovely as always, Cloudy! 8D 03:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'll fix the ear pink, but not the eye. It came directly from his other images, and I don't want to change that. 03:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/midriff highlight some. <3 <span style="">05:25, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Re-uploaded. No highlights on this one. 05:30, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It seems like the light source for the head and the rest of the body are different from each other. The head one's coming from the right and the other is coming from the left. could you fix that? 09:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did teh shading. Still looks bad. xD 00:28, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nah. Increase the shading on the shoulders/neck and blur the shading on the chest and maybe lessen the shading on the top of the muzzle. 00:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

You have that small ridge of light shading close to the lineart on the back. Could you darken that? Breeze whisker  00:49, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (W) - Redone
OA was Bramble with a tweak by Mint and Icy, I think. Stripes had to be redone and it was in the redo section. Comments? 03:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 04:17, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The apprentice's stripes were redone, so could you match that image? This is lovely. :) 08:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't really like the way I made the apprentice. I would love you if you redid the apprentice too because this is lovely. Darken the earpink a bit ^^ 15:31, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Mountain Sure thing! To be honest, I totally forgot that she was seen as an apprentice. 04:49, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 22:56, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:23, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Round the shading on the shoulder a little. Breeze whisker  00:47, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brightwhisker (D) - Tweaked
Shading tweak. I have no idea who the OA is because Sandy renamed the file. Comments? 04:03, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the white a bit? Good job. ^^ 09:02, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't the brown match the leader image? 16:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I had this reserved..? O_o 22:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

<p style="margin-left: 40px">Nevermind, Im an idiot. I accidently reserved her warrior image XD 22:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded @Bloo, no you're not an idiot! You just made a mistake. We all make them! 04:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Uh huh, sure....xD <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 08:18, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:21, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, the color? It's still a lot lighter than the leader. Or is the leader image getting tweaked as well? 00:40, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's just because of the shading, since on her leader, the shading placement is mainly on the brown and the highlights on the white. 00:59, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge (KP) ~ Redone
I snatched this the second Paleh said it needed to be added to the list on the talk page. I've wanted to do a kittypet for a while, since I've only done one before, and I love black and white cats. ;) He needed black shoulders and a white tail-tip, so I just made him a tux patterned cat. OA was Quailflightthecat with tweaks/redos by Ashshadow, Bramble, and Ivystripe. Comments? 16:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his back/base of his tail if there's supposed to be any xD. This is beautiful <3. 19:01, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less red and lighten the black just a tad. 20:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

His eyes lok a little off to me. Could you use the one on the tutorial? 22:58, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

They look alright to me, just like he's scared or something, and considering his personality, might be accurate...:P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

In the words of Paleh: " Ass Add shading shading to the collar" X3 23:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded-re. 05:10, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I wouldn't like to be known for such a little mistake. :(. Define the earpink a tad. 02:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dustpelt (W) - Redone
Original artist was Bramble, with an eye tweak from Nightshine, a redo from Cloudskye, and a small eye depth tweak from Icestorm that was reverted. Comments? 20:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

LOL. My horrible stripes have finally been redone! Thank you, Moon. This looks much better. Define the ear pink a tad. 20:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded No problem. 21:01, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks awesome O8 blur or smudge the paler belly 22:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the tail. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:05, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:47, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make his stripes a tad bigger? He looks a bit mottled. 11:51, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't look mottled to me. 17:55, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

He looks oddly flat. Define the shading and highlights, and maybe darken/intensify them. Breeze whisker  00:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll get rid of the waste at the next reupload. 02:39, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

...or get rid of it now? What's the point in reuploading it when it's not completely finished? <span style="">02:47 Fri Feb 10

...then just critique it, I'll be reuploading it? 02:54, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Stonetooth (E) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and was redone by me. And now I'm redoing it again XP I got permission to redo and I absolutly hated his old one. It was a triangle tabby too. Comments? 23:42, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

lololol. Darken the shading just a little bit, and especially under his chin and on his front leg 23:44, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  23:51, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

You have waste under the chin! And under the paws, Hahahah! 8D 23:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded hgfdheoir *mountainranges* D8< 23:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

That space of just grey under the ear is bothering me. Could you put a small stripe or something there? Breeze whisker  00:44, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  01:26, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Frecklewish (MCA) - Redone
I hate to see this one redone, but it's a triangle tabby, so... :P OA was the lovely Oblivion. Comments? 12:34, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define thear ear pink on ---> side. Lovely :3  13:15, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W) ~ Tweaked
I feel I should do more tweaks -_- Anyway, It needed a bushy tail. It was on the list. OA was Bramble and was tweaked/redone by a lot of people. Comments? 14:50, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the tail more squirrel-like by any chance? o3o Lovely. ^^ 16:10, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oi. Lineart fail. Is this better? 01:43, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Harespring (W) ~ Tweaked
Technically, it was "redone" so to say, but I didn't actually change anything. I used the original image, actually, and just added another few layers and played around with it. Anyways, OA is Echomist with a transparency fix by Bramble, and tweaks by Nightshine and Bloo. 02:50, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. Lovely Cloudy ^^ 02:52, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <3 02:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)