Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Sagewhisker(MC) - Redone
I fail ;.; Most recent OA's were Silver and Dazzy. I added a graying muzzle. Comments? 15:44, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge it than blur it a bit? That way it'll look like it's actually graying instead of a gray muzzle. 12:50, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:53, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten her a little? She's a little dark to be white. 02:18, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I just ran the dodge tool over it. x3 20:36, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? 01:53, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:29, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

It still doesn't look white...and the shading's a bit off... Honestly, I think it should just be redone. I've been meaning to ask that for a while now....x.x

I'm withdrawing this. x3 21:37, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? I still have the .pxd and I can redo it. (That is if you decide nominating this first. Besides I'd like to fix the mistake of making her look gray and not white x3.) 22:21, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

I see no problems with that. Go ahead, Silver.

Reuploaded I redid the shading. I used the regular mc shading because I can never get the regular shading right. Also I only lightened it a smidge, because as you can tell it's light enough. x3 22:41, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading. /

Lighten up the muzzle a bit? I just think it'd come in gradually rather than a solid dark block of grey. 00:34, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing. 22:46, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a little more.

She needs blue eyes. 04:37, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 11:04, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Shading still needs more blurring. o3o 11:17 Mon Oct 29

Reuploaded Redid the shading again. 23:11, October 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:34, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:15, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the tail shading match the light source. If her muzzle was graying, that's from age, and that'd mean it's losing it's color. It shouldn't be darker.... should it? I don't think that's possible. But then, I've never heard of a white cat with a graying muzzle at all, so... 18:53, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the muzzle a lot. Also, I didn't change the tail shading because I think it looks fine... o3o 23:17, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading, please.

I dunno if this is gonna make sense, but the tail's texture should be going upwards. That's the way tail fur grows. owo 05:38 Fri Nov 2

IT's not that the tail looks bad, it's that it doesn't follow the light source. It needs to be changed. 06:50, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The best I could do without making it look like before. 11:18, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

The tail shading still doesn't match the light source. 05:34, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

How can I make it match? I've never done this shading style before so I have no clue how to match it... 14:10, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to be on the other side of the tail and towards the base. It also needs to be blurred. 00:30, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for shading. 05:16, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten it just a tad? 23:45, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded this and the warrior image. 15:54, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the depth in the shading? (same goes for the warrior, but I'm lazy)

(kind of not the place for this buuut) Shelly, ya think you could like, rejoin just till this is approved? Since you have to be a warrior to tweak and if you're not in the project you're not technically one. We all know you were a warrior, but it'd be great if you could just rejoin to avoid having to deal with this being brought up about users who aren't members being allowed to tweak since we've "done it before". Nothing major, would just save some confusion on newer users parts and possibly avoid later troubles. Would really appreciate it. 06:53, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

No one else has ever had a problem with me doing tweaks as a non-member. It'd be silly to join PCA for just a week to do something like this. I know where you're coming from, but I've yet to see someone complain about me doing this. If someone had come forward with a complaint about me doing this because they don't know that I'm a retired senior warrior, I'd be all for it, but since no one has I don't see the point. And even if you do it's as simple as explaining "she used to be a senior warrior." Seven words. And the front page of the project says that outsiders are allowed to donate chararts. It doesn't say that that's limited to new chararts. Anyway, re-uploaded. 16:34, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

It /does/ say, however, that only warriors and up may tweak chararts. Doesn't matter if you have the files or not, Shelly. "Used to be" doesn't mean you are now. ( don't shoot me I'm just going with what the guidelines say )

Nobody has had a problem with it, cause from what I've heard at least, nobody really noticed it much. It says you have to be a warrior, and other older members have done the same thing to be able to tweak. Just joined for a certain image, stating they didn't intend to stay. Currently you aren't a warrior, and therefore aren't following the guidelines, could you please just rejoin till this is approved so we don't have any problems? It'd take all of a couple seconds. 05:02, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Fine, if it'll make you happy. I still see nothing wrong with it. The entire point of the rule is that only those more experienced in making chararts should be changing existing ones, and I am very much experienced in chararts. 18:47, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart (W) - Tweaked
Last OA was Ivy. Tweaked the shading 01:28, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 23:18, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:19, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

the stripes looks like theyre lost in the shading and highlights. try to define them more, if you can. 05:36, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:13, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a touch? 00:32, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:56, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots(W) - Redone
None of the images matched. OA was Stoney. I based it off of this image, so I'm pretty sure it's natural. Comments? 01:00, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a bit and maybe add some more? 01:20, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

give em' a smudge too; they look a bit paintbrushed on 04:22, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think they need to be smudged. That's not what makes them look paintbrushy. Just point the tips more, kind of like on the elder image, rather than having them so round and you should be fine. Also define the shading, especially on the shoulder. Nice job Ducksauce ouo I swear I will never typo that again   06:48, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe blur or smudge the pale chest into the pelt more so it looks more natural? (or something)  22:58, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) ~ Redone
Duck and I got permission to redo them all. OA was Mousetalon and Stoney. Comments? 01:28, 02, 11, 2012

Can you darken him just a bit to match the warrior? (Only going with what was posted first.)

I got the colors directly from Duck so I'd rather not. 13:32, 02, 11, 2012

Late comment, but could you blur the shading a little bit on the rear and define it on the tail? 01:04, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be blurred, but definitely needs to be defined ont he tail, yeah. 05:35, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkheart (W) ~ Withdrawn
i swear this was punishment for Troutclaw e.e anyways, redone cause he didn't really look mottled. OA was Icy. This doesn't match at all, but comments? ;-; 12:24 Fri Nov 2

Some of the lines where you smudged are still sharp. Can you blur them? 22:22, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading some? 03:36, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

He looks too spotted. It needs to be more like flecks rather than leopard spots or something. Otherwise it's not actually mottled. 04:58, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm gonna withdraw this. I've lost the file, and it's just a bit difficult trying to match Skt's Hawkheart. 05:13 Tue Nov 6

Bella (KP) - Redone
Ewewew I killed it. That shoulder shading. Bleh, I hope she's not too red. Redone because the shading gave her a greenish tint and the white looked too dark. OA was BlueOrca. 00:53, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yay, she's sexy. 8D Blur the tail shading.

Reuploaded. 01:01, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

The brown seems a tad gingery, could you desaturate it a bit? Lovely job whiskey! 8D 05:34, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hope that worked. 04:16, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (W) ~ Tweaked
I defined/darkened the shading a tad. OA's include Leafstrike, Mounty, and Stoney. I think....o.o  03:08, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (A) - Tweaked
Got the file from Shelly, so yes, this is tweaked. redid shading and tail stripes and lineart, tweaked earpink and pelt colors to match. Comments? 11:04, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (Ki) - Tweaked
I swear this is tweaked. Eyes and earpink got lost when it was lightened, so those are redone, and I put a new layer of shading over it after it was lighter. Last OA was Ducksauce. Comments? 11:07, November 6, 2012 (UTC)