Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Bumblestripe (W) - Tweaked
I tried....o.0 OA is Night Shine, tweaked by Rainlegs. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 18:05, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes to look more natural. Looks better than it used to. 18:21, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 18:39, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes and add more aend define them. 20:54, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. `Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 21:14, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

I meant blur the stripes to look furry. ^^; 23:07, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. xD I'll try. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 23:12, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to. I just think they'd look better like that. 23:14, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Too late. BD Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 23:33, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. 23:48, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Am I allowed to? I'm only really meant to be doing the stripes. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 23:50, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

It states in the guidelines that you're only supposed to do what's supposed to be tweaked. You don't have to do it. 23:52, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

And the tweak page states that the stripes needed to be redone. 01:07, October 21, 2011 (UTC

The stripes look very unrealistic. You might want to try re-doing them, the furry thing is a bit off. 20:38, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. Alos enlargen the ear pink more and also darken it. I know ear pink can be a pain.... 20:50, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink looks fine Sandstorm. Maybe smudge the stripe on the head a bit more if you keep the stripes this way though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:35, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 01:20, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes, or texture, looks like it's half smudged half blurred. In other words, I think you should emphasize and smudge it a bit more. If you're using GIMP, I suggest the shift filter. :D 01:25, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I gave what Atelda said a try. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 01:39, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Either blur it or smudge it more. <span style="">01:50 Sat Oct 22

Re-uploaded. Image of evil. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 01:56, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Try smudging the stripes out onto the pelt. IDK but also blur the shading too. 00:46, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, this is being tweaked for the STRIPES. Nothing else. The shading should stay like that (unless it the shading on the stripes) Do you think you could add/darken the shading on the stripes though? They look like thay don't really have any. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:34, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the bit of waste near the ear. 17:40, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 22:44, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Honeyfern (W) Tweaked
- I changed her strpes because they were unrealistic and adde better mottles and tweaked the shading. Icethroat = OA, I tweaked it, and now I tweaked it again., 23:22, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink. 11:27, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Could you darken the whole thing a tad though so she's more light brown than cream? Andmaybe ad another stripe or two the the very top of the shoulder/back, it looks kind of empty there.Also, I think the earpink is dark enough Silvereye, but it does need to be brightened and maybe defined a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:37, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add more shading onto the tail. 19:44, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mottles on the tail, face, and forelegs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:54, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wait wait wait isn't mottled with spots? If so add some to make it more....uniquie. Also darken the stripes. 00:48, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Unique? This IS mottled. This HAS spots. No, I'm not ading more, I'm not changing the mottles or the stripes. 14:55, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Honeyfern was on the tweak list for her stripes... In fact, this charart wasn't on the list at all. I call shenanigans! Chararts need to be on the tweak list to be tweaked or redone so everyone knows why they need to be tweaked and can contest the claim if they wish. 16:10, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also, as it appears this is basically a redo (the base color, stripes, ear-pink, and dapples have changed, only leaving the eyes the same) this needs to have been on the list for a week before you even reserved it, which I see you didn't.. Icestorm, you haven't reserved either of the images on here! You're a lead, you can't go around ignoring the rules you are supposed to inforce. 16:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, relax. The world isn't going to end. Honeyfern should have been put. Her base color is the same, parts of the shading was erased and added back on, and I SAID I changed the Y stripes and the dapples. I did reserve them, I'm forgetful but I finally did. This has been up for three days and no one has had a problem about it. The world sin't ending. 16:28, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I have a problem when those in charge won't follow the rules they are meant to help enforce. No, the world isn't going to end, but don't try to make trivial your own follies. The base does not look the same to me. The previous had more of an dark brown tint, where this looks more tan. And I looked through the history, Honeyfern's kit image is on there, but her warrior image hasn't been in the last two weeks. 16:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Not to butt in, but they seem like highlights to me and they look a lot better than they were before. It's Icy's image to tweak. And there's a lot of ways you can tweak images without redoing them. :P 16:39, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

You know what, everyone just shut the hell up and grow up. It's a damn image. Who cares if Icey tweaked it? Shellheart, you're not a lead, so I would like it if you stopped. You've been nothing but bossy since becoming a warrior. Just drop it, and move on. For crying out loud, this happens every time Icey redoes/tweaks an image. You're just mad because she's done something you don't like. 16:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

In what ways have I been bossy? I know full well I'm not a lead, and I don't complain on every one of Icestorm's images .Just this one and Crookedstar's, and I've had good reason to both times. I'm so sorry I expect the rules to be followed! And, for the record, I'm absolutely fine with how the image looks, I think it's pretty. 16:54, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

How are you not bossy? Who cares that the image hasn't been on the whole two weeks? You've done a few images that haven't been on the list for two weeks. 16:57, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The rule only applies for redos, not tweaks. And Honeyfern wasn't on the list at all when she put this up.

But you know what? Whatever. Fine, ignore the rule. I won't argue anymore if you guys think that I'm trying to be a "mini-lead" by expecting rules to be followed by everyone. 17:02, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Seriously guys? Another stupid arguement over a damn image? Come on. If you think it should be redone/tweaked, you do it. Isn't that what tweaking is all about? Making an image look better? And that's exactly what Icestorm is trying to do. Shellheart, just comment on what needs to be done. This project is for commenting on art to be approved or made better, not a debate on ''how. ''Take your arguements away from the image please. It's not like Icestorm is breaking the Wiki Code, she's just doing what needs to be done. You think we have time to put every image needing tweaking on the list? Some are those that people don't even get to. Darken the shading on the front right paw. 20:06, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well said, Splashy. That's exactly what this project is for. Back in the old days, things like this would never happen... Dull the highlights (or whatever you use in place of them). 20:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Gosh you guys, so much drama lately. -.- And Icey, may I ask WHY you won't chenge the stripes or mottles? I have no problem with it, I just think you should give a reason is all. I still stand by what I said before about the shoulder needing a bit more stripes, but whatever. *shrugs* But could you brighten the head highlight (if you use them) or if you don't use them, lighten the part where the highlights would go. (we really need to find an easier way to say that XD) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:32, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I meant I'm not changing the existing stripes, but I'll add some more :P 20:11, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Added more stripes, darkened base color. I didn't use highlights in this image. 17:08, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oakfur (W) ~ Tweaked
Woo! I'm a warrior! *waves arms and dances madly* XD Anyway... OA was Bramble and I adjusted the shading. 19:21, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 22:49, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 22:58, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded Shadewing - The ear-pinks from the original image so I won't touch that unless somebody else says I should. 10:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 11:11, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  17:25, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! blur the tail shading. 23:11, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 08:10, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather (W) - Redone
I couldn't tweak the old version, I just had to redo it. All the images have highlight problems if you ask me :p The artists range from Sandstar12, to Bramble, to Nightshine, and I think tweaked by Moonflight later on. 19:56, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather! So pretty. Lighten the entire thing and blur the edges of the shading, and lighten the ear pink. 20:49, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

If you do remember the rules, you are not allowed to redo things without permission. This should be declined, but hoinestly i dont care for this one. But if it happens again its declined. 22:48, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Who's permission? I couldn't tweak this one. It said the shading needed redone, and how was I supposed to do that without messing anything up? I couldn't do anything to the old image that needed to be taken care of like the blotchy highlights and shading. In my point of view, it should've been on the redone section rather then tweaking. 00:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

In any case, it should be lightened. He looks black. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, who cares? It's a solid cat. It's not like she redid, say, Spottedleaf or something, who's character has such a complex description. There's no reason to ask to redo a solid cat. The only thing you need to do right at this moment, is lighten it, as Sky suggested. 01:00, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:08, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink. 01:10, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a whole lot. 03:34, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:54, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 17:43, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:10, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Windflight(E) - tweaked
now onto the senior citizen version! (fixed shading)

OA=Minnowclaw - 22:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Blur the earpink. 22:57, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Ya want me to do what now? (Fixed SHADING) xD - 23:00, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Try match stripes with warrior image, more Leaf-storm,8:53,October 23,2011 (UTC)

lolwhut? Im just tweaking this, Leafstorm XD Oh, and shadings already blurred to the max - 16:06, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The old shading may not be blurred to the max if you just layered the shading over. Blur the old shading on the shoulder. It shouldn't be TOO hard to avoid the stripes, anhd really, who cars if a litle tiny speck of the stripe is blurred to fix the shading? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:23, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Shrink the earpink a tad. 17:44, October 24, 2011 (UTC

Blur the haunch shading. 23:06, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Donezooo, and im not touching the earpink - 00:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Harespring(W) - Tweaked
More comin' from your truly, OA=Echomist and I added some shading - 23:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I actually put this on the tweak list and didn't mean to. I meant HareFLIGHT. I changed it last night I think. *cough*Fail on my part, sorry*cough* XD But I think Harespring DID need his shading darkened so I guess this would still need to be tweaked. XD But anyays, lighten the shading ever so slightly so the white doesn't look so gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:53, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

How do you tweak these images and make them so wonderful? I personally, cannot. Blur the shading near the neck a little. 00:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Niceee. The shading makes the brown part on the back a bit gray, can you fix that? 14:53, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly smooth out the earpink, it looks a little blotchy. 17:46, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 23:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -pffft, I went ahead and tweaked without even knowing it wasnt even on the list XD - 00:09, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) - Redone
Gross color. Gross image. Ew. Comments? 15:09, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Not reserved beforehand, needs to be declined. 16:22, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

It won't be declined. I reserved him, I'm forgetful, thanks for asking. 16:26, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

It still wasn't reserved before you took him on, Ice. I like your chararts, I really do, but you're "forgetting" the rules. 16:28, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

But now he is. It's fine, I'm not going to again. I know the rules, thanks, and before you even make a comment about me should knowing them better, I'm just going to say, don't even dare. 16:31, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

o.o ... Anyways, put less shading on the top of the tail. Good job. 18:02, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Shellhearts right. This should be declined because of the rule we all agreed on. But i dont really care that this was redone so lets keep it anyway. Blur the smudging. 18:51, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I redid it, and no one whined at me. Honestly, you couldn't work with the old image. It was impossible. Darken the shading. 19:48, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'm beginning to think you guys just dislike Icestorm :P Define the shading on the paws. 20:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't. Change the ear-pink to be a bit less neon, I think. Also, do you think his ears should be tawny as well? It said his head was tawny, which could include his ears. Honestly, though, the tawny thing could've been a mistake in the writing, as it wasn't in the allegiances but in part of the book. How do we decide what is a mistake and what isn't, anyway? 21:24, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The head's colour looks too gray. Make it a bit more of a pale browny-ginger (tawny). <span style="">23:57 Sun Oct 23

Icey, try and take the color from Oakheart's alt warrior. You know, the one I despise? 00:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

If he's ginger, shouldn't he have stripes? And weird looking cat = check. But you did your best to make him look handsome  00:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's cluttered enough, even without the stripes. I'd say let it slide, but that would be against the rules. 00:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add stripes if you want...just add a cool effect of smudging. This is tawny according to Google colors, but I'm not sure if I shoulod remove it or not. 20:09, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the color is fine, but you can add stripes, since it is ginger. 23:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The rest of the pelt's colouring is fine, but the head really looks quite gray. I'd add stripes as well. <span style="">02:48 Tue Oct 25

Re-Uploaded: Changed the tawny head, added stripes, darkened shading, blurred smudging, defined shading on paws. 17:04, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

And yes, that's tawny. The color came straight from Oakheart's alt warrior. If anyone would know that's tawny, it's me. XD 17:06, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes kinda look like water ripples :P. Define the tail shading. 17:19, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I know ;) This is a gross color to work with. 17:37, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail (RC) (E) - Redone
I have permision now, don't worry :). Original artist was Bramble, shading needed tweaking and stripes needed to match the warriors :D . Comments?  Elorisa   19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the smudges :3 20:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I personally like the smudges. The make him look furry, which is brilliant to me. I think you should just enlarge the ear-pink a bit. 20:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like the smudges too, Shellheart. They're just a little sharp. 21:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say leave 'em as they are. They look good to me :3 <span style="">23:55 Sun Oct 23

Reuploaded~better?  Elorisa   02:02, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the reddish parts on her haunch and her leg? 17:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the ear-pink curve round more at the top. 08:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Splashheart (W) - Redone
I figured since I did his leader, I should do his warrior as well. OA was Bramble, I redid it and changed the colour to match the leader's. 01:58, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. 02:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading/highlights. <span style="">02:03 Mon Oct 24

Re-uploaded. Done, but it's not showing ._. Just go to the file page if it doesn't show up. 02:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading or tone down the highlights. Move the tail highlight away from the base of the tail; it kinda looks like a stripe. Center the ear-pink, make it a tad smaller and brighten it. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:34, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:39, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the highlight on the tail. 22:59, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:35, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

If you're using highlights, brighten the one on the face, or dull the other ones to match. Enlarge the haunch highlight/thin out the haunch shading and blur all shading and/or highlights. <span style="">02:50 Tue Oct 25

Re-uploaded. 19:49, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink seems to fill the entire ear. Make it a bit smaller. 21:56, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and the haunch highlight (just using the word highlight as a metaphor for the lighter areas). 17:17, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (W) - Redone
Well... I tried... Redid her stripes to match Silverstream's. OA was me. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shoulder highlight bigger, blur the haunch highlight, and change the image size so it's only as big as the cat—no extra spaces on the outside. 03:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion, no highlights in this one, but I moved the shading. Forgive me if I'm sounding blunt, but I have no idea what you're talking about with the image size. I used the same sized blanks as everything else. Could you explain further? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:32, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

All right, I'm very OCD about this (I always was, don't worry), but look at Splashheart's warrior image. There is no extra space above his nose/ears, below his feet, or next to his tail. What I'm saying is just crop the image until the image size only extends as far as where the black ends. Does that make any sense to you? 03:38, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dull and enlarge the earpink. <span style="">04:21 Mon Oct 24

Better. Can you make the stripes a tad bdarker? Blpur the highlights. 20:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the muzzle and above the haunch. 21:20, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripes? Silverstream's stripes seem darker. 22:32, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion. Because I'm such a derp, I have no idea how to fix that. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really see the haunch highlight, can you brighten it a tad? (Sozzle if there ain't highlights.) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:18, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Lo) - Redone
I was so stupid before, but now Mosspelt is approved, I can put this up, and I don't think you could just tweak it without redoing. Original artist was Minnowclaw, and the shading and highlights were blotchy. 16:51, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base color just a tad. 16:58, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:13, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, you may not have been able to work with it before without redoing, but aren't you supposed to ask a lead anyways? Or did you do that and just forget to put that in the first post? If you didn't I think this may be declined. I've seen other images declined for the same reason. If this stays up though, make the belly shading go up a bit higher. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:45, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made this before that rule was made, if you want I could ask permission. 20:07, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

You originally had this up before the rule was announced. I think it's fine either way. There should be no reason to ask if you follow the same pelt style, which you did her. Blur the white on the tail. 21:52, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:42, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs some more blurring. 03:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. 08:16, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred enough? 17:25, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the white marking on his chest. <span style="">00:45 Wed Oct 26

Reuploaded I redid the white flash. 22:34, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Scourge (ki) - Tweaked
NOW I UNDERSTAND. Yes..sorry.. I dont know that.... then I putting it agin... sorry agin!!!! I really dont know Im allowen to have only 2 charart each.Leaf-storm,19:32,October 24,2011 (UTC)

Make the blurring on his white paw less blotchy, and please try and make an effort with spelling. In addition, try to avoid capitals and excessive exclamation marks. 21:40, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the left earpink, and write the OA and why it was tweaked. 22:53, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mosswisker&Stealthfire is OA and reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:48,October 25,2011 (UTC)

And I tweaked it becuase he have the white paw on the wrong side Leaf-storm,16:50,October 25,2011 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) - Tweaked
I added a ripped ear and fixed some blurred lineart. OA was Sandy, tweaked by Bramble. 23:37, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the image. It's all scrunched up o3o. 23:41, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

It's because the changes aren't showing. Thicken the tear on the ear. It's too thin. 23:42, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:03, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I know this was only nominated for the lineart, but the shading really needs to be blurred. <span style="">02:52 Tue Oct 25

Shading looks prety fine to me - 03:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like it needs blurring to me. 03:47, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, the shading needs to be blurred. 08:09, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but keep in mind I don't have the original layering for this, so I'm working with everything on one layer. It's hard blurring without catching the lineart in the crossfire. 19:40, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks like it needs to be blurred to me, but I have a way you can keep from getting the lineart. You'd still have to be careful of the earpink, but if you want I can leave a message on your talk page so I don't cause clutter here? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:15, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (W) - Redone
I redid it 'cause the shading was being a pain and was way too blotchy to work with. OA was Maplefern. Comments? <span style="">04:59 Tue Oct 25

Looks great! Blur the shoulder shading. 19:38, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Oblivion :3 <span style="">23:39 Tue Oct 25

Mistystar (D) - Tweaked
Just fixed the shading so it wan't blotchy. Yes, the earpink isn't the same, but I can't tweak shading on any image without redoing the earpink, sorry. Anyways, OA was Sandstar, tweaked by Scarletwind. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:02, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still blotchy, can you blur it? 15:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing on the image, Stoneclaw. 15:30, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch shading? 22:02, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around her chin and head. Nice job! ɛɱ ɱɛy!  22:07, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

You guys are aware that this is the right image, correct? The changes aren't showing again. 22:09, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. XD Changes WERE showing when I posted this, but, well..... yeah. XD Anyways, Misty, were you at least looking at the right image? If so, then sure I'll blure it, but I wanna make sure. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:12, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I was looking at the wrong version. ;D Can you blur the head shading instead? 22:16, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Did my best, but the shading's pretty much blurred to the max right now. I'd have to blurr the whole shading with the guassian blur to get it any better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:31, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) - Tweaked
OA was Dawnleaf. His discription said he was flecked, and he just had spots. If you need me to fiddle with the shading in the light spots to make it lighter, I understand, because I just burned on top of everything. Oh, and I only have two up now as Ivypool was approved. Comments for improvement? 17:43, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the flecks near the back and on the tail. Nice job! 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Maybe blur some of the flecks on his side (whatever it's called :P) ɛɱ  ɱɛy!  22:09, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and I didn't exactly know what you meant, Emma, so I just blurred the flecks on his torso (middle part of his body in between his front and hind limbs)  00:01, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur her spots more. 20:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:58, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh how I love xcf. files >:3 22:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little too dark, or too yellow. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Minty (Q) - Tweaked
OA was Mumble785, and the shading needed to be blurred badly and the earpink needed to be removed from the other ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:10, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks really nice! Good job! --<span style="color: orange; font-family: Lucinda; background: black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: red"> MY HAND IS A DOLPHIN!!!!!!! 23:11, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, but try not to comment just to compliment an image. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:12, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The neck shading and middle-part shading still needs to be blurred. 23:13, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The front leg farthest from us seems seems to need some shading/darkening/something as it really stands out to me. :P Love it, otherwise! 23:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Holy cow, her eyes look epic. Darken the shading on the legs a bit. 23:19, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:24, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading this is fantastic! 11:57, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - It's blurred to the max now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:53, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (W)- Tweaked
OA was SparrowWing, and Bracken and I tweaked it later on. The shading was blotchy, so I re-did that. :3 03:06, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe re-do the stripes? I'm not sure, they're just a...little...eh to me. 12:37, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, Icey. There's no need to tweak them. In fact, I've always been fond of this image. Since you're the last one to tweak it, can you please fix the ear pink? It looks too pointy. Blur it a bit, if you don't mind. 00:23, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brook (Ph) - Tweaked
OA was Rainy, and I tore the ear. I am only tweaking the ear, nothing else. 22:06, October 26, 2011 (UTC)