Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Bluestar (Alt. Star 3) ~ Tweaked
OA was Giaria, I simply removed the scar and torn ear, as the image this was based off of didn't have them. 22:34, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little bit, please? I can see it in most places, but I'm having trouble seeing the depth, imho.

I'm hesitant to do so, as it wasn't nominated for that, and I can see the shading just fine; however, I'll do it if others agree. 18:43, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

I've had to do things an image isn't nominated for, as has everyone else. I don't think that's a legitimate reason not to do a tweak. This and the "it's fine" things really do need to stop.

Reuploaded. I understand. 18:26, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading 03:52, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:35, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is tad dark, can you lighten it a bit? 05:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Leafstar (KP) - Tweaked
- ugghhh... so ugly... OA was me. Tweaked to match. I spent more time trying to get it to mach the queen, since both chararts show Leafy's back 22:25, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading 02:45, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:55, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the cream and brown parts- I cannot tell them apart. 08:10, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:43, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think her stripes on her other images were more smudged than blurred? This could be smudged too as you know, I can't see things properly. 13:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:24, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad darker on her other images, perhaps try sharpening them? 07:58, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt W.) - Tweaked
Redid the shading and lord did that change the entire image way more than I thought it would.

Define the depth and blur the shading more. 12:59, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Instead of defining the depth, I darkened it (and blurred it), since I really don't think adding more shading is going to make this image any better.... except I think I blurred it too much on the tail...

Could you add stripes, since his other images are being nominated for it? 03:46, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Shading seems to be leaking a little bit along the back and towards the bottom of the tail. 21:38, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't want to add stripes to this.

There's a point on his hind leg where the shading is kinda hard edged. Maybe smooth out the tail shading as well. Perhaps define shading on the front ear where it meets the back 11:49, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did stuff.

There's still no shading on the ear :/ is there not supposed to be shading? The leg shading is kinda hard edged still too. 13:18, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I've never added shading there before...? Also, it shouldn't be hard-edged... I literally smudged all the shading. Are you sure you're not seeing a stripe??

Does the stripes need to match his other images? 05:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

It's an alt 08:36, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (K) ~ Tweaked
OAs are a various number of people I can't remember, but the most recent was Breeze. Tweaked to darken. My computer has difficulty displaying dark colors, so I can't tell whether it's too light or dark or what. 21:35, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

It's a little bit too dark imo, maybe lighten it a bit Storm  &#9835;  22:14, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 22:52, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

I have the file for this on my computer, would you like it? I think the shading kinda went poof in the process... Also, where's the pale underbelly...?

Re-upped Having issues with my email (please don't make me explain) so I can't take the file =( I tried to add a pale underbelly and I defined the shading but if I need to have the file to do this tweak I'm unfortunately going to have to withdraw.  22:57, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Bramble, Oblivion, Misty and Teldy. Tweaked to have stripes. The shading kinda went poof so I had to tweak that a little. Otherwise, I did not touch anything else on the image. 08:31, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

The bottom stripes on his leg are completely hard edged :P 11:47, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:52, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Berrynose (A) - Tweaked
OAs are Nightshine, Shelly and Skye. All colors from the warrior 09:14, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (L) - Tweaked
Not removing the pale underbelly- his images should rightfully have it, as Duck's original kit version did in fact have one, and it got lost when it was tweaked back in September. I've already said something about it to Burnt, and I think the apprentice is going to be renominated, as I cannot see that pale underbelly at all, and the kit has a comment on it. OA of the original version is Shelly, and then I redid it.

I'm so heart broken. Don't ask me why. The two ears' earpink look sort of different. 11:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean? You're gonna need to be a lot more specific. It can't be the color, as my ear pink is all on one layer, and these colors are from the original kit file that Duck sent me. These ears are also slightly shaded, but not too much. I honestly have absolutely no idea what you mean.

Whoops, I mean one is kinda more smudged than the other one?

Do you mean the fur isn't as smeared into the earpink as the (our) right one? Also, there's a little waste beneath the tail underside. 12:32, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I wanted an excuse to tweak that ear pink anyways.

Bramblestar (A) ~ Tweaked
Redone artist was Diablo. Tweaked for darkness. 03:43, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

You darkened the eyes. Brighten them up, please. 03:45, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Only the eye white was darkened a bit. 03:51, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Restored back. Pale chest needs to be re-added. 11:41, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

The color for it is at about the range of #74553B. Yay for still having the files.

I think the underbelly is pale enough tbh imho cuz it's paler than the base pelt color. The earpink seems to be going out of the ear  please no more heartbreaking 11:46, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Um, Bramblesnow, it needs to match the other images. Right now, it doesn't. The original kit image did in fact have a pale underbelly that was actually distinctive, and it needs to be readded (on this and the kit) in order to match the original version of the kit's image properly. It was restored to the tweak page because it needed to be tweaked again.

-*sigh* Okay. Good luck everyone, good luck my love  Smooth out the shading where it meets the muzzle, define shading on the bottom of his tail. 11:52, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (A) ~ Redone
the oa was me, and I had to redo this for darkening - I lost the file and darkening the image without layers resulted in a blocky mess. That isn't texture, it's how I smudged the shading. 14:37, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt Q 3) ~ Tweaked
stripes, for whatever reason. 18:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Tansypaw (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and she was tweaked to have stripes. I also messed with the shading, because it hid them at first. 19:16, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

These appear to be triangular styled stripes. Could you try and match a certain style? 00:41, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Daisy (Q) ~ Tweaked
she needed stripes. I'm the OA of the redone blank, and the old blank artists were Misty, Ash, and a few other users for minor tweaks. The reason why it looks so different from Skt's alt Q is probably due to our different shading. 01:37, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Rosepetal (A) - Tweaked
- OA was me. Added stripes and fiddled with the shading a bit too 02:26, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
OA is Mousetalon, redone artists are Scarletwind and Mistypebble and tweakers are Rowanflight and Scarletwind. Tweaked to add stripes. The highlights are irritating, making the stripes look funny. 05:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Make sure to add a layer of shading over the stripes; they look kind of flat 05:06, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I already did it, but I lightened the solid colour then darkened the shading over the tabby. That should look better. 05:26, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 08:37, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Longtail (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Mosswhisker, Redone artist is Paleclaw and Tweakers are Sandstar12 and Hawkmask. Tweaked to change brown and elongate tail. 06:32, May 26, 2015 (UTC)