Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Molepaw (OTS) ~ Silver nomination
I know,it needs improvements, but I am willing to nominate him for silver status. Comments? 04:13, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Expand NIght Whispers. 01:30 Thu Dec 8

In the Forgotten Warrior, can you possibly add in when Jayfeather goes into Molepaw's mind and sees the fox moment, and describe the moment? 04:49, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also add in a better main quote, and add some to the bottom? 04:50, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 00:10 Wed Dec 14

Yep, starting now. -- 01:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

In The Forgotten Warrior, it isn't explained why Molepaw gave in and let Firestar apprentice him to Rosepetal, it just says that it does. Could you add that in, please? 22:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I added that. I'll work on the quotes now. 00:17, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you get another quote in there please? 15:28 Mon Dec 26

Voleclaw - Silver Nomination
All the article needs is a few quotes, so I'll add those later. x3 17:00, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Explain who Voleclaw's mother/siblings are at the beginning. Other than that it looks really good. 20:49, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

The main quote is the exact same quote as the bottom one. But it looks great aside from that. ;3 23:57, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up some of the paragraphs in the history? 00:58, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Done, and done. Woo. xD 23:00, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Whelp...CBV? 20:17, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Woops, vote is up. x3 18:28, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mallownose ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all history sections, and added in two quotes. Comments? 00:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Rephrase the second paragraph in Dark River. 00:17, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 23:45, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Expand TFA more is you can .21:31 Sat Dec 24

Any other quotes? This looks great! 00:50, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Plumwillow - Silver Nomination
I added three quotes, and I added Beyond the Code. This is my first nomination, so, I hope I'm doing this right. 20:43, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add descriptions for the first two quotes in her quote section. Your doing it right, don't worry. 20:49 Tue Dec 20

Done... 20:55, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Expand SkyClan's Destiny. 21:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Could you rephrase the "The Rescue" section please? 01:16, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Rephrased The Rescue. I'll expand SD soon. 21:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really find a way to expand it, so, I guess, if someone could help, that'd be great... o3o 00:03, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You can detail it. 02:21 Sat Dec 24

I'm withdrawing this if that's allowed... 03:20, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Could I possibly take over? 16:58, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Of course. 23:00, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I kind of tweaked/added a bit on Beyond the Code, I fixed some things in The Rescue, and did the same for SkyClan's Destiny. I think she needs a better main quote so I'll go look for one now, but she isn't really mentioned a lot, (only when really a kit) so I can't make any promises. 02:03, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any better quotes? Especially for the main quote? Other than that, it looks ready for voting. 21:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I might have found one.. In Beyond the Code when Sol's patrol comes back with the prey, and the clan is complimenting them... Is that good enough? Other than that, I can't really find anything else. 03:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds fine =3 04:02, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I added it in. How does it look? 20:03, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Great, CBV? 18:28, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vixenkit ~ Silver Nomination
I've expanded as much as possible, since she's only mentioned in 2 sentences...comments? 02:01, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Any other quotes? 05:15, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

There is pretty much nothing wrong with it, except can you make the part where Vxenkit is arguing with Silverkit? And that section could be expanded more by putting in how Silverkit had to sleep with them or putting in that part where Silverkit mentions that she is bigger than Vixenkit. 19:05, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Pricklekit (RC) ~ Silver Nomination
Well believe it or not, I clicked the random page button, and Pricklekit's page came up. I looked through it and it seemed like a good article to nominate. Suggestions? F i r e s t a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas &amp; Hannukah to all!  21:03, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Silly Rowan, you had to have put it on Bronze status first. 21:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I did that for you. o3o 21:34, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

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I can't find anything wrong with it, but could a main quote be added? 19:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I looked through Sunrise and only Petalkit was mentioned. I can't find anything on Pricklekit. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas &amp; Hannukah to all!  20:10, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Is his/her name even mentione din a book? YOu can use a narrator quote. <span style="">02:27 Sat Dec 24

No I didn't see it, and I know xD 02:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Twi musn't have but it for bronze, so I juts did. <span style="">21:17 Sat Dec 24

Okay, Thanks Sweet. 02:32, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome. <span style="">17:12 Sun Dec 25

Anything else I can add? 23:04, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 21:58, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 18:28, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Gray Sky Before Dawn - Silver Nomination
Strangely drawn to this one. I expanded a lot of Outcast, and I'll work on Sign of the Moon soon too. I can already think of one or two quotes that describe his personality more. So, comments and suggestions? 23:59, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I was gonna do him. :P Just add some quotes expand SOtM and he's good. <span style="">00:13 Sat Dec 24

Sorry, Sweetflower! x3 I changed the main quote because I didn't really like the one before (no offense to anybody who did), added more quotes, and expanded SoTM. 02:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok. And the main quote is good now. <span style="">02:49 Sat Dec 24

I did a bit of expanding. 01:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Jingo - Silver Nomination
History has been expanded big time, and I'll be adding quotes. Comments? 22:02, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Break up some paragraphs in the history. Apart from that and no quotes, this article is awesome! <span style="">00:44, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

(Just letting you know) I made it bronze. <span style="">02:53 Sun Dec 25

This is great! I know you're gonna be dealing with the quotes, but could you make the main quote show her personality more? 00:17, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I've been doing a bit of expanding as the ending was cut short due to a turn on my time table. Anyways, I'll be getting that done. =3 18:28, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Nicknames?
Should there be a nickname space on Jayfeather's characat, I'm only asking because Lionblaze called him 'Jay' and I'm not sure if we should add them in for the char. that were called something shorter than their usual name (but not something like 'mousebrain' or whatever) so what do you guys think? I'm not part of this project but I was just thinking about it. 16:04, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Mhm, it's a good idea, it really is, but personally, I don't think we need it. It's not like every cat has a nickname, and it'd be weird just having one cat with this nickname section. <span style="">16:12 Mon Dec 26

And Poppydawn also called Sweetpaw 'Sweet' so two cats, xD 16:54, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but, with Sweetpaw, it was her daughter. :P <span style="">17:11 Mon Dec 26

Due to the fact that it's not the majority of cats being called by their name prefix, I think it'd just fit in the Trivia with a citation if it's not there already. 22:20, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think that's a good idea! ^ <span style="">22:59 Mon Dec 26

I agree with Atelda. *going into picky mode* I asked Kate once on her blog about when Lionblaze called Jayfeather "Jay", and she said it was a mistake because she was so used to calling him by the first part of his name, so I always considered it more of an error than a nickname. :P *picky mode over* 02:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Good point Hollydapple. It like saying someone's human name is Jessica. Their nickname might be Jess. It's not like it's an official name or anything. <span style="">01:37, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Removing to elders
I think we should start moving people who haven't contributed to PC for 4-6+ months should be made elders. It makes sense doesn't it? What do you think? <span style="">21:56 Mon Dec 26

It makes sense, but why do we even need an elders section? If the user is inactive, why do they deserve to still be in PC? If they still would like to be in PC, they can rejoin. 22:23, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I see your point. :3 If they are just in the table, for the sake of it, and not contributing, the don't deserve to be in PC. If they said something about going away for a certain time period. Than that'd probably be okay. <span style="">22:53 Mon Dec 26

Maybe if you haven't contributed in PC between 1 and 2 months, you could go on the elder list, and after that if they haven't contributed in 1 to 2 months while they've been on the elder list they could be removed from the project. I think PB and PW do this. <span style="">23:27, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

But honestly, why do we need the elders rank? If the user isn't contributing to the project, then they shouldn't be in the project. I, Mistystar, and Moonflight clean out the members list from time to time. I don't see why we must have another rank for inactive members. 15:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't think we need an elders section. If their inactive and don't perticipate in the project for a certain amount of tim ethey might as well be removed. <span style="">19:35 Sat Dec 31

I suppose. It doesn't really bother me, as I try to be active. <span style="">00:36, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Flower (Ro) ~ Silver Nomination
So sorry that I haven't been here.. I missed editing articles, (more than usual, at least) so I have decided to come back from the dead. I edited Flower just a tad, since there really wasn't anything to add. It is really similar to Warriors App paragraph, like as if the person just copied it right off of there. Should I fix it a bit, or should I just leave it as it is? 03:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Which Flower. Flower Sharpclaw's sister, or Flower the loner who was mentioned in Sunrise? <span style="">17:09 Tue Dec 27

Argh, though I had the right page... Dumb computer. >.< Flower as in Sharpclaws sister, sorry about that. :3 (I'll change the link)  01:57, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Any quotes? I'm not sure that Warriors App only characters get quotes. <span style="">01:44, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

You could probably use the same quote I used for Jessamy. 01:51, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Oblivion. I'll go add it. ^-^  20:37, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Olivenose ~ Silver Nomination
I like her name. :3 Comments? <span style="">17:17 Tue Dec 27

Quotes are on the way. <span style="">17:31 Tue Dec 27

Could you expand Battles of the Clans any more? 00:58, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded by two words, that's all I could. xD <span style="">18:05 Wed Dec 28

Quotes are done. <span style="">21:15 Wed Dec 28

Echomist ~ Silver Nomination
Quotes are on the way! Comments? <span style="">17:21 Tue Dec 27

Could you possibly make a new section for Into the Wild and add how she wasn't in the allegiances there? 01:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

She might have died before than though. If ya read the last sentence in her CP section, it says she might have died. :D <span style="">17:51 Wed Dec 28

Quotes are added. <span style="">21:13 Wed Dec 28

Jessamy - Silver Nomination
All right, I hope I can remember how to do this. I added a quote that isn't really a quote, but her history looks good to me. 02:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice so far. The first paragraph in her history section seems to describe Sharpclaw more than her. 17:16, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed, hopefully. 01:15, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still describes Sharpclaw more. I suggest perhaps just deleting the whole paragraph, unless you can find a way to emerge it into the other sections. <span style="">01:51, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Deleted. 01:53, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cinders - Silver Nomination
I liked her for some reason. I made her bronze status. Comments? 03:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I rewrote 98% of her history. Will work on the quotes tomorrow. 04:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, minor expanding, added references for all her family, and worked on the quotes. I'll shut up now. x3 19:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Furzepelt - Silver Nomination
I added quotes, which was pretty much all she needed. 01:55, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly detail The Sign of the Moon just a bit more? 20:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:01, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Leaving
I've decided to leave this wiki....if you want to know why, look at my userpage. 10:18, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ah! :( Bye Rainwillow, good luck in life! <span style="">21:53 Thu Dec 29

>:( <span style="">00:15, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Mouthclaw - Silver Nomination
I expanded the history by 2 paragraphs, added references and a see also. Comments? <span style="">02:04, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Can you make the second paragraph flow a bit more? And can you explain what the Clan cats do after they learn what Mouthclaw did? (if that makes any sense xD)  03:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Like this? I added a whole new paragraph to the trouble that Sunpelt gets in, if that's what you mean. <span style="">23:41, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

I just realised I need to add quotes. They will be coming in a moment. <span style="">23:49, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

No, I think you should delete that paragraph, in my opinion. I just realized that I asked you to write more about Sunpelt that Mouthclaw, my bad... >.<  19:12, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thats okay xD I expanded the last paragraph more and added quotes. I'm not sure about the quotes though, as she's only mentioned in, 2 pages -_- <span style="">01:32, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Onestar-Silver Nomination
I would like to nominate Onestar, any coments?

Add a section for The Forgotten Warrior. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  02:29 Fri Dec 30

where would i add it

Under the section for Sign of the Moon. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  02:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Firestar's Quest? I haven't read that book in a while, so I don't know if there's anything *to* expand. :P 02:58, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

ok, any more comments there is nothing to add on firestars quest.

Expand Dawn. <span style="">18:41 Fri Dec 30

The style in Fire and Ice could use some work, Forest of Secrets might be possible to expand, The Darkest Hour needs to focus more on Onestar, Eclipse needs expanding, and The Forgotten Warrior does too. 21:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

i havent read the forgotten warrior what do i do

Use the browse inside of it. <span style="">23:18, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Rabbitstar ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote. I think that the overall history looks good. Comments? 01:16, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand his history anymore, or add anymore quotes? <span style="">04:14 Sun Jan 1

Join/Rejoin Request
Hey, I would like to join/rejoin the project. I am a former member returning to the Wiki. Thank you! 01:46, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sure. If you need to refresh, just take a look at the FAQ. Welcome back. 18:28, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur
I want to nominate Mousefur for gold, but the only thing holding me back is that she isn't or hasn't been (not that I know of) on the front page. If she has, can someone let me know so I can nominate her for gold, and if she hasn't, can somebody do something? Thank You 21:40, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

She has not been on the front page, and during our next feature article discussion, perhaps you can bring her article up and see if it's worth being the FA. 21:53, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Heatherstar - Silver Nomination
I think she's ready for a silver nomination. Comments? 03:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbittail - Silver Nomination
I added some quotes. I think they describe him pretty well. Comments? 04:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Should you describe that in WindClan, they had picked out warriors to travel down in the tunnels in the beginning? 04:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I will, but, where would I add that? 04:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)