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Plumclaw (Q) ~ For Approval
Defined the shading more

Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 16:22, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think this needs a date and reservation on the chart

I reserved her. Reuploaded Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 20:37, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 15:09, Feb 16, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I can somewhat see that it is there, but it is extremely faint. If no one else is having issues seeing it, feel free to ignore this. I don't have the best eyesight at times. 18:43 Thu Feb 16

Could you define the eye depth some? Unless I'm blind and it's there. I can't see any, so if there's none, try using an orange color as the depth marker, because it will look better, depth-wise. 13:01, 2/17/2017

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  09:00, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 09:18, Feb 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us :) 01:56, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 17:10, Feb 27, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the <-- side of the face, belly, and front paws. And, could you perhaps expand the shading a little on the belly? It might help with the depth

I think that the depth could stand to be defined some more, it's looking quite flat. 19:31, 2/28/2017

Still working? 15:15, 3/04/2017

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 08:01, Mar 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think the belly shading should stop at the line for the shoulder, it's extending past and making it look like the belly is overlapping the shoulder, if that makes sense. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:52, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's also leaking away from the lineart on the <-- elbow

Sweetbriar (Star) ~ For Approval
Can't believe I actually did this! I'm a beginner don't judge me. Also I want to know how you guys do those signatures so pretty. BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 17:44, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Looks pretty good for your first image! Although, since it's your first, we need the title to be 'For Evaluation' instead of 'For Approval'. Also this needs to be reserved on the charart table. As for the image itself, the shading needs to be smoothed out more, and it looks like you're missing lineart on the eyes. Try overlapping the current lineart onto the existing image, and that should fix it. Try to blend the earpink a little more and maybe use a little more pinkish-gray color instead of orange. Technically all colors need to be colorpicked from the existing images, and how you do that is you save one of the older images and open that into the art program and colorpick from the places you need to color that specific area. In terms of stripe placement, it needs quite a bit more, and I believe there is texture, or that's probably just the stripes smudged. Sorry if this is a wall of text. ;-; 17:59, 2/23/2017

Sorry for double post, but the shading is leaking in some areas along the image, and the nose needs to be colored in. If you ever need any help, don't hesitate to ask! I'd be more than happy to help you out with image creation. Just gimme a shout on my talk page :) 18:00, 2/23/2017

Heh, I'm not that pleased with the final product. Thanks, though. I can't get to the editing yet, because i'm working on a school project. :( I will try to get to it, though. Thanks again BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 18:31, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

You're amazing at the stripes! Even I can't do stripes properly yet. Mind defining the eye depth?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:19, February 24, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

reuploaded BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 00:58, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink, and give the shading more shape so it isn't a straight line across the body. Curve it along the face and same with the other parts. The apprentice tutorials are lots of help. :) 01:01, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you know how to use the smudge tool? If so, everything still needs to be smudged: the shading, stripes, and white parts. It also appears you're trying to do things on one layer. Do you know how to use layers? If not, I suggest asking one of the other members here to show you how to do an image like that, specifically on a stream. 01:10, 2/24/2017

The layers were a bit of a hassle. When I tried to use them, my paint tool, Paint.NET shipped it out as one layer. . . so, not really the best option for me. Also I use pixlr and I still haven't got the hang of it. >:( BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 06:06, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you know of a program called Paint Tool SAI? It's actually a lot easier and more nifty to use than Paint.NET. You could download the free trial and get started :) It's a lot better 13:37, 2/24/2017

reuploaded 17:57 February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd for the kit? The colors look a little off and the images have texture. 18:53 Fri Feb 24

You nees to use layers, Starlight. Your lineart is blurred in many places. Please, if you need help, don't hesitate to ask. 19:39, 2/24/2017

Yep, I need help. For some reason I can't use layers primarily because of the weird way my art progam works. I might need to get a different art program. Also the apprentice tutorials aren't really helping me. And before anyone asks, I can get very busy during weekdays. So bombarding me with all you got is not the best way to go. 21:36 Feb 24, 2017

Define the eye depth, and smooth the shading on the front legs and tail

reuploaded --BlazeclawXAshfall (talk) 06:23, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I think the nose pink should be a bit brighter to match the kit's. And smooth out and add some more texture. 16:25, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

There seem to be lighter lines (probably just erased marks) on the stripes that shouldn't be there, and the stripes on the queen and kit don't look quite as blurred, maybe sharpen them a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:36, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

There should only be three colors for the pelt: The white, the base, and the stripes. It appears that you have an additional shade in there within the stripes that shouldn't be there. The texture is also beneath the stripes, placed much closer together and darker in color. I'm gonna guess those lighter lines are texture. If you want the HEX codes for the colors, don't hesitate to ask me. I'm also having trouble seeing the markings at all under the shading. 22:31 Mon Feb 27

Yep. Can I have the HEX codes? I really need to redo this somehow. . . --BlazeclawXAshfall (talk) 23:31, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Base: 947455 ; Stripes: 3b2618 ; White: FFFFFF ; Ear pink/Nose: 3b2618 ^ There ya go. The texture is two layers with the same color as the stripes with lowered opacity (77%). Hopefully this helps ^^ 23:43 Mon Feb 27

Can I have the HEX for the eyes? Also, you made a mistake with the Ear pink/Nose part. It's the same as the stripes. :P So maybe the fixed HEX for that as well? BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:04 2/28/17

There also seems to be a layer of sharp lines scattered on top of the image - could you smooth those out?

b58d8e <-- There is the correct one. Sorry 'bout that. My computer is sometimes a little glitchy from the programs I have to run for my research and whatnot. And the eyes are good how they are now, just need a little depth is all. <span style="">01:14 Tue Feb 28

re-up Should I smudge the texture? I'm not sure about that. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:04 2/28/17

Yeah it looks too solid. Also, smudge/blur the ear pink too.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:41, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Heh, it still doesn't look good. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 03:14 3/1/17

Smudge the earpink?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:57, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The stripes on the eyes should be thicker. 21:26, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest, face and paws, and there's some specks of white on the <--- front paw that's not shaded. 22:09, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps smooth/even out the texture, and define the eye depth

Actually, can you help me with the eye depth and earpink part? I probably won't be able to know what you're talking about. . . BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:43 3/2/17

Eye depth means varying the color of the eye, so it's not just flat color. So say, for example, an eye would be a lighter shade up top, and would gradually get darker as it went downward. For the earpink, it looks sharp, as if it was drawn on. Much of the time, we strive to make it more realistic, and we blur/smudge it into the fur to make it look as if it has a tuft of fur in it, or it gradually transitions from earpink to pelt.

Will get to that tomorrow (in my time). It's nighttime here! BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 05:57 3/2/17

re-up BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 23:53 3/2/17

Smooth out the shading on the chest and main body.

You seem to be doing quite well now, so I'll promote you into an apprentice! The stripes still need to be smudged, and it appears that some shading or the earpink is leaking onto a few pixels on the ear? Smooth out the shading on the front legs/paws, and switch the tail shading to the other side of the tail, as your light source contradicts that. The tail shading is a little sharp at the tail-tip, so maybe smooth that out as well. Also the shading inside ---> ear needs to be smoothed out as well, and I still can't make out the eye depth. <span style="">13:23, 3/03/2017

Could you define the markings on the face? I'm having some trouble seeing them. 17:39, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

re-up can't wait until this is approved-- i had to use the erase tool because my program wasn't cooperating BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 23:51 3/4/17

Comments before approval? 00:48, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry to break the CBA, but the shading needs to be smoothed out a lot.

There is waste between the tail and back and by the front paw, on the right side. 02:36, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

There's a few pixels of shading missing from where the flank shading meets the shoulder. 02:45, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

For the tail shading source, I believe it would look something like this, not all on one side as it is currently because of your light source.

The top of the second line above the square marking on the side needs to be much thicker, I think, to match the other images, and there are small brown lines all over the image that I don't see on the other images. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:55, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up there, how's that? BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 23:20 3/5/17

Could you add a bit more shading on the <- side of the tail, nearer to the top, and lessen it in the middle? It still looks mostly on one side, and the light shows from <-- so it wouldn't be quite as much. Also, can you lighten the white a little on the chest? Most of it looks really red/brown when it's under shading.

The white doesn't need to be lightened, it's the shading that's too dark. Lower the opacity and give it a good blur/smudge

You're missing the dorsal stripe. The queen is the first image in this set, not the kit.

re-up What is the dorsal stripe?? o_O ;-; BlazeclawXAshfall  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 1:23 3/7/17

A dorsal stripe is the main tabby stripe on a cat, like Graystripe as a prime example. <span style="">14:51, 3/07/2017

Willownose (Queen) ~ For Approval
Джулия де Мортон (talk) 12:11, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice. Taper the ends on the stripes a little bit and define the light on the legs. <span style="">15:18 Sun Feb 26

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 15:54, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Add some shading in the ears? 16:30, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 18:20, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and add a little bit of depth? 23:06, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:07, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the face, it kinda looks like there's no shading on the cheek closest to us😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 18:07, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The cheek is fine, but can you define the depth? 11:22, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:24, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the --> back paw? Looks really sharp on my screen

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:46, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is a little too sharp still. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 23:57 3/2/17

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 12:27, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the belly and the depth on the whole image <span style="">13:33, 3/03/2017

I changed this heading to '~ For Approval" and promoted you to apprentice, since I checked and saw that you had an image already approved before this one.

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 07:55, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

There is an unfilled pixel on the front paw farthest from us. :) 15:12, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the --> front paw, and then maybe define the depth a smidge overall?

Lessen the shading on the flank, as I feel with your lightsource coming from that direction, there would be a lot less shading there <span style="">01:34, 3/06/2017

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 05:09, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Morningflower (Star) - For Evalutation
hecho en photoshop, fue un imagen dificíl... quien inventado esta textura? Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:41, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

realizé había debido reservar esto imagen en la pagína frente... lo siento. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:43, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Please only speak english on this wiki. <span style="">13:05, 2/26/2017

Define/Darken the shading. Very pretty! 16:10, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

This looks beautiful! Could you darken the pupils, they look grey to me. — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  16:18, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you all. I darkened the shading. I'll darken the pupils later. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 02:37, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading needs to be darkened more. I cannot see it. <span style="">02:52, 2/27/2017

how's this? Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 13:51, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define it a bit more. And don't forget to say reuploaded or some variation of that every time you re-upload it. 16:24, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I think the whole image should be darkened a bit to match the other Morningflower images. — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  16:46, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink?

I reuploaded it and did everything everyone suggested :] Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:25, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

I really think the shading needs to be darkened quite a lot more. <span style="">19:38, 2/28/2017

Can you darken or add shading if there's any? I can't make it out😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 21:20, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Broken Foot, don't repeat what other have said. As for the image, define the earpink. 23:27, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Is it against the rules or something? Anyways, maybe darken the pupil, it doesn't look exactly black.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:40, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

I'm not entirely sure it's against the rules, but it's a bit ... offputting (is that the right word?) to have something be said twice during the same re-uploading period. <span style="">03:44, 3/01/2017

I reuploaded! I'm sure Broken Foot just accidentally didn't see the comment above... ;w; anyway, I darkened the shading!! I apologize massively if it seemed like I didn't do so previously- I really tried ! ouo maybe it's because of this stupid tortoiseshell pattern... Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:22, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Gonna have to ask you to darken the shading again. It's visible, but barely 22:13, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think that the eye color on this image is darker than on the other images. --ErmineGlow (talk) 05:12, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

] Done! Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:12, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

I still can barley see the shading. 13:12, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 13:29, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

What are you using for your shading? It seems to have not changed at all, and you've been asked 7 times. The only places I can see the shading is (barely) on the stomach, tail, and under the head. I'm going to have to ask you to darken it alot more please. <span style="">13:36, 3/03/2017

I can see it just fine. Super dark and super defined shading is not a requirement of this project.

The shading is fine. It's not even really that defined on the other images in the set. I gave this design a try for fun before it was first confirmed, and the pattern is really odd to work with... <span style="">17:45 Fri Mar 3

I just meant I couldn't see it that well. I guess then just define and darken it on the legs, tail and head/face <span style="">20:40, 3/03/2017

I think the --> front paw should be more clear, for lack of better word, because you can see on her other images that the patterning isn't so much on the paws.

I reuploaded it (darkened shading and changed pattern on right leg)! @Snowdapple: What do you mean? Well.. I used a brush to draw out the shading, I don't really understand what do you mean but what am I using for it... Rest assured I did try and darken it every time people here asked me to, but this pattern is hectic, as Sunjaw mentioned ;-;

@Spookycat: is this what you meant?

Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 03:12, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Not quite^^ I meant to say, take the patterning mostly off the --> paw, and take a little off both front paws, because you can see on the other images that she has paws with no patterning on them.

I think i got it. i'm not sure though. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 15:04, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Robinstar (L) ~ Declined
Eaglestorm1 (talk) 00:55, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth and the eye depth?

Smooth the shading and define it on the tail. <span style="">01:15 Tue Feb 28

Re-up Eaglestorm1 (talk) 01:31, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

For a beginner, this is not bad. Blur the texture a bit?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 02:17, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

May I get a second opinion. I am pretty sure you don't have to blur texture... 02:35, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading on the belly, legs, and chest. I think the texture is fine. 02:39, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

I had agreed with Wolf, I'm pretty sure Troll does it. Thanks Vet :3 Eaglestorm1 (talk) 02:43, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Make the tail more ginger; I honestly thought it was light brown/golden-brown. 03:44, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

textures fine but it's supposed to be a bit soft like fur, so maybe blur (or smudge) it a small bit. it is a little sharp. 20:47, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

This needs to be reserved.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:54, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Broken, it is reserved <span style="">22:22, 3/02/2017

Still working?

The tail still needs some work on shading, also the shading could be darkened on the <-- leg. Maybe smudge the earpink a bit? BlazeclawXAshfall Tails Entwined in Fanfic 3:04 3/7/17

Declined due to lack of work, sorry.

Spiderpelt (W) ~ CBA
23:37, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Maybe define the shading on the four paws a little bit? 23:40, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  23:45, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail. 23:50, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

 Reups  23:53, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Lighen him up. He looks too dark to be silver. Also, define the tail shading more, as well the earpink. 23:57, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  00:12, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head? 16:09, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

 Reups  22:57, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell if that dark spot by the stomach is shading or a black stripe? If so, could you define which it is? Also define the shading depth overall <span style="">04:02, 3/02/2017

Reups 20:31, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Idk if its just me, but the whole image looks blurry? It just looks a little odd with the lineart sharp, and everything else blurred, but idk. Also could you define/sharpen the earpink a smidge? <span style="">20:43, 3/02/2017

Reups 21:07, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Could you perhaps lighten the image a tiny bit? Just a very very little bit, since at first glance, it looks more silver-gray than silver

Looks fine to me; I think the darkness is a mixture of shading and texture.

Should i lighten the texture and shading? 05:29, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Nah both are fine, tbh <span style="">01:35, 3/06/2017

CBA?

Oakleaf (Q) - CBA
07:34, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

can you add more shading depth?

This looks a tad bit too red to be dark ginger. Also could you define the belly shading? <span style="">13:41, 3/03/2017

Re-uploaded 17:27, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

Some of the white is leaking onto the front leg farthest to us. 18:14, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:52, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a bit more? 14:27, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:29, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">23:23, 3/06/2017

Graywing (RC) (MC) ~ For Approval
Yeaaaaaaaah! ::::) <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 09:53, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

just a reminder to not thumb your images. i deleted the thumbing for you, but please remember for next time :)

Oh, sorry)) <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 10:51, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

since she's a riverclan cat, she'll need long fur. 13:16, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

Also, this file needs to be renamed to File:Graywing (RC).mc.png. Could you smooth out the shading a bit and define the shading depth? <span style="">13:42, 3/03/2017

Can you define the shading on the <-- back paw just a little? Also, I renamed this for you :3

What means phrase "define the shading depth"? I will correct, but so hard to start again. And thank you, Spooky. <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 09:26, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth means adding a little bit of very dark shading around the edges of the image where your light source wouldnt shine, thus creating an even better 3d effect <span style="">15:19, 3/04/2017

I understand, thanks <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 09:33, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Still working? <span style="">14:49, 3/07/2017

Stagleap (TR) (E) - For Approval
All layers/colors from StarClan. <span style="">14:22 Fri Mar 3

Can you smooth out the shading some? This is good! <span style="">20:43, 3/03/2017

smooth out the texture a bit? 19:10, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="">15:39 Mon Mar 6

Lakestorm (D) ~ For Approval
First deputy 00:54, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Ya mind smoothing out the shading? It looks a bit darker in some parts others, but it might be just my eyes.

Lovely image^^ You mind defining the light on the front paws, and defining the shading on the --> front paw?

Shading darkness is not required to be the same throughout the entire image, Jaysnow.

Could you smooth out the stripes a tad bit? I think I know you're going for an effect here, but they look a little sharp <span style="">17:10, 3/04/2017

these scars appear to be more on the bridge of the nose rather than the muzzle. 20:21, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 21:02, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Okay, thanks for clearing that up.^^

Could you lighten the shading? <span style="">20:31, 3/06/2017

Maybe taper the scars slightly - they look a bit flat/drawn on

Ashfur (SC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Is anyone else having issues with the way images look in here? Btw I will fix the shading iin the next upload. 18:23, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

I really like how you did the eyes. Can you define the shading on the tail, and maybe I'm wrong but there looks like there's some leaking shading on the arm and the back of the tail. 00:42, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Thank you! 05:10 March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? <span style="">23:24, 3/06/2017

I think the shading is fine, Winter.--😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 01:59, March 7, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

There could be a bit more depth. 02:32, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Flintfang (E) - For Approval
19:27, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

The eyes here look more gray-brown than amber 19:32, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Well, they don't have to be amber, do they? There's no specified color, and I matched them to the warrior's, which appeared to be the first image in the set. 19:40, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think I'm the only one who finds that some of the colours on images seem to be kind of washed out for some reason. I think that's the issue here. 19:42, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Warrior image is the first in the set, yes. That just happened to be the color I used.

Define/darken the shading on the head a bit? 02:37, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:02, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? <span style="">23:24, 3/06/2017

Re-uploaded. 23:53, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reena (KP) (KP) ~ For Approval


Define the ear pink a tiny bit? 02:36, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Quietkit (Star) ~ For Evaluation
First charart. I'm not sure if I did this right. Shypaw11 (talk) 16:48, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Alright, so this is a good job for your first time. This might be a whole wall of text, I apologize in advance.

The major thing would be to match the other image. Here, the chest is a more rounded yellow color with orange splotches. On the other image, the chest is an orangey-brown color kind of in a flash-design, so maybe if you changed the shape and either smudged/blurred (not sure which one) the colour, it would look similar. I'm not sure, but I think you're allowed to colour-pick from the other images. Next, the earpink here is a very neon purple colour, and we don't want that. On the kit image, the earpink is a more reddish colour, so even just colour picking and changing that would work. The other image has texture, which would mean taking a 1px or whatever brush and making small lines that look like fur. And then there are small things, such as the nose colour being pink, and the eyes being a darker blue. You could also define the eye depth (which means the colours in the eye go from light to dark). I hope this wasn't too harsh or long ... great job nonetheless :) 17:06, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can you please explain the texture a bit more? Shypaw11 (talk) 17:49, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Texture is basically adding "fur" to the charart, or adding the effect of fur so it seems like it's not a flat image. It's not required, but since the kit image has texture, it is required for the star image. To add texture, take a 1px (usually the smallest brush size you have) and add small lines to mimic the direction of fur. This is usually done on a different layer (usually a layer above the pelt color and stripes but usually not above the shading). I usually use black or a darker hue than the pelt color for texture, but you can always lower the opacity of it later.

Also, I think the cream belly should stretch all the way to the <-- chest fluff, and down to the underside of the chest where it meets the shoulder. And darken/define your shading. ^^ You're doing a great job so far. 18:15, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Winterpaw and Vec! I defined the shading, added texture, and fixed the chest fur. Shypaw11 (talk) 18:47, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink some, and expand the chest to fill the spot to the <--, since it doesn't quite fill where it's supposed to be. Also, the color of it looks different than the kit, and a bit too orange. Define the shading, as well.

Reuploaded Defined shading, smoothed ear pink, and lightened and expanded chest fur. Shypaw11 (talk) 21:42, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the texture a bit, as well as the chest. Also, the chest looks too bright and orange. Try colorpicking from the kit. 22:18, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid shading, texture and stripes. How do you colorpick from a different image? Shypaw11 (talk) 22:38, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened Shading Shypaw11 (talk) 23:12, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure what program you use, but to answer your previous question: When color picking another image, download it, open it in your art program, and then use the color-picking tool to grab it's color. On my program, it looks like a dropper, but on others, I'm sure there's a guide somewhere that would show which one it is. Try to pick from the lightest point, not under shading or texture, if you can. Then, you'll have that color saved to use on your image.

Reuploaded Thanks Spooky! I use GIMP, and hopefully this is better. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:08, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink, blur/smudge the shading and smooth out the stripes on the arms and tail.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:30, March 6, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded Smudged ear pink, smoothed out stripes, and blurred the shading. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:56, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the image. Shypaw11 (talk) 01:32, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Are you colorpicking from the image? The colors look a little off, especially the chest. Connect the lines of the texture. Smudge the chest and earpink some more <span style="">01:37, 3/06/2017

There is waste beside and on top of the <- ear. Also, maybe smudge/blur the earpink a bit more, and make it less neon, darker. 01:59, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

The eye looks a bit milky? Or is that just me. .3. 02:40, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 03:04, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading some?

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 20:48, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Are those lines on the body texture? Because they look a little. . . strange. Also smudge the ears a bit so it looks like ear fur. I also suggest improving the shading, mostly on the chest. Refer to the apprentice tutorials if you need it, they can be lifesavers! BlazeclawXAshfall Tails Entwined in Fanfic 2:59 3/7/17

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 03:28, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Crowfrost (Star) - For Approval
honestly it sucks that he died, I was looking forward to a Crowstar. ehh if you ask me he only died so the Tigerheart and Dovewing drama could be juicier. 19:01, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white on the chest.

This needs a date to be reserved <span style="">19:05, 3/05/2017

Smoothen out the shading in the ear, and along with the chest as Snowed mentioned, brighten the white on the chin. Also, I added the (Star) to the title 19:34, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the shading on the front paws, and slightly define the tail shading

The white chest seems too dark. Loos more gray..either way, good job!😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:29, March 6, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Broken please stop repeating comments. It was already said above <span style="">01:38, 3/06/2017

Reuploaded 18:53, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Deerfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors from DF image. Comments? 20:17, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the facial shading a teeny bit, and maybe add a little depth to the tail shading?

Reuploaded. 21:37, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Could you possibly smudge/blur the white?

Reuploaded. 02:47, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Lilyflower (Star) ~ For Approval
20:59, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

this is cute :3 Could you define the shading on the face?

Can you define the shading depth on the white? <span style="">23:25, 3/06/2017

How come the first whisker on the > side of the face, the chin, starts and then gets cut off in the middle, and then starts again? Is this a usual thing? I'm not very sure, so if it's intentional and allowed then sorry about the hassle. 16:56, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Frogtail (Star) ~ For approval
Homosneksual (talk) 22:56, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

I removed the alignments. Do not align your images. Also, define the shading, and there is a white pixel waste outside the -> front paw. 23:15, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alignment confuses me. Whenever you upload the image, you click the option to put it on the left, right? That's how I've done it before and I wasn't corrected on it.

It says at the very top of this page not to align your images. Also when you want to reupload this image, please go to File:Frogtail.star.png to upload, that way you do not use the alignments. <span style="">01:40, 3/06/2017

Smudge the ear pink a bit. 02:19, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Homosneksual (talk) 03:13, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Flystar (L) ~ For Approval
<span style="">03:32, 3/06/2017

lighten the shading

Reuploaded Also smoothed out the tail and haunch shading, because i submitted this late last night and i was so tired <span style="">14:10, 3/06/2017

Reuploaded lightened the texture a bit <span style="">00:48, 3/07/2017

Vinetail (D) ~ For Approval
05:25, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like theres some earpink on <--- that ear? If it's supposed to be there, ignore this. Also could you define the depth of shading on the neck? This looks awesome! <span style="">14:11, 3/06/2017

There's nothing saying both ears can't have earpink. o.O

reuploaded ty, and all my deputies have earpink on that ear. it's intentional. 19:58, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the tail shading bit :) Mostly where the tail meets the bum 00:28, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Larksplash (Q) ~ For Approval
(to the tune of "Blank Space") Got a long list of failed queen art, they'll show you I'm not an artist

Smooth out the shading and lighten it on the back/rump area please. Also define the shading on the head <span style="">14:12, 3/06/2017

Define shading on tail, maybe. BlazeclawXAshfall Tails Entwined in Fanfic 1:13 3/7/17

Re-uploaded this pattern is so difficult to shade

Does it have eyelashes? Are those allowed? :) 14:05, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oops. Used the old version of the blank xD (when you nap and charart simultaneously)

Mossheart (TC) (Q) ~ For Approval
Mossheart is a bluish-gray she-cat with green eyes. This is my first queen, and my first charart. 21:46, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

pretty good. define the shading everywhere. 21:50, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups defined shading 21:54, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the belly shading, since queens are pretty round. Also smooth the earpink shading on the <-- ear, looks a little sharp

Reups  Defined belly shading and smoothed the ear pink shading. 22:07, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Add more shading along the <--- side of her head and define the shading depth? <span style="">23:26, 3/06/2017

Reups Added more shading on head and defined shading depth. 23:34, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading quite a bit. 23:56, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Smoothed shading out. 00:00, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, and define the light on the leg thats underneath her tummy (mostly hidden leg) <span style="">00:45, 3/07/2017

Reups Defined shading on legs and defined light on tummy leg. :3 00:49, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think you know what you're doing, so I'll promote you into an apprentice :3 Also define the shading on the tail, maybe lessen a little of the shading on her head so the light shines on the muzzle some, and maybe lighten that part of the shading a little as well? <span style="">00:52, 3/07/2017

Reups Thx Snow. Also, lessened shading on face, and defined shading on the tail. 01:32, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Hayberry (Queen) - For Evaluation
First image ErmineGlow (talk) 22:44, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Don't align images. Also, define the shading on the stomach. 22:50, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

there shouldn't be eyelashes. 22:53, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

How come the <- ear has a rip in it? 22:54, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading looks a little flat on the belly. Shypaw11 (talk) 22:57, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I don't know how that rip happened, but it's fixed. Plus the eyelashes and belly shading.

There is still some black in the ear from where the rip was. Shypaw11 (talk) 23:10, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I blurred and smudged it to remove. Does it look better? ErmineGlow (talk) 23:14, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere <span style="">23:21, 3/06/2017

Reups Darkened shading ErmineGlow (talk)

I think you need to give your shading more shape, as these are supposed to represent 3d images, making it look real, so to speak. Instead of just plopping the shading on the tail and the legs as you appear to be, try only putting the shading around the edges of the legs/tail/etc., like some of the images on here. The apprentice tutorials help as well, and it's good to look at shading placement <span style="">23:28, 3/06/2017

Reups I tried to follow the shading placement image, so hopefully this is better. ErmineGlow (talk)

The lineart is blurred by where the ear tear and eyelashes were. 23:59, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Look better? --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:34, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit 00:41, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:47, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Don't forget your signature. Also, smooth out the shading <span style="">00:46, 3/07/2017

Reups Better? --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:53, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

A little! Smooth out the shading on her tail, define the light on her legs as well <span style="">00:55, 3/07/2017

Add some shading where her chest is, and darken the shading on her tail just a tiny bit. BlazeclawXAshfall Tails Entwined in Fanfic (just realized that i was shipping myself with ashfur XD) 1:11 3/7/17

Reups Tried to smooth out the shading, and also darkened the shading at the tip of the tail. --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:16, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Try to use a darker color for the shading, because it appears that the shading is the same color as the pelt.

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 03:50, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, it looks like a square on the flank <span style="">03:54, 3/07/2017

Reups Better looking? ErmineGlow (talk) 03:57, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

That looks more appropriate as the color for the shading. Try and lower the opacity and blur it more to smooth it out.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:41, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Nightmask (D) - For Approval
This is my fifth image. I am really happy with it. :]  03:43, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the tail a bit?)Ignore me if its fine)😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:34, March 7, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

I can see it fine. Second opinion? (The tail is skinny so there isn't a lot of room to have shading and the base colour) 04:50, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Tail looks fine to me.

I think it looks fine too ErmineGlow (talk) 04:56, March 7, 2017 (UTC)