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Antpelt (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading and earpink. OA was me. Comments? 03:04, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the ear with the ear pink. =P

Define the shading on his haunch just a little more. 19:17, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the back shading. 21:00, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Yes, Re-uploaded 02:09, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Q) - Redone
OA was me (fun fact, this was my second ever approved image!) I am so glad I could kill this. I redid the stripes and the cream, and I tinted the shading, so hopefully it matches better. Oh, and the markings aren't as blurred as they were last time, though I think some of the stripes may need blurred more, not sure, gimmie your opinion. I hate stretching out stripes on queens ._. 18:00, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 8D 18:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty <3 Blur the earpink :3 19:47, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful! Define the shading a tad. 01:31, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so glad that you guys agree that this looks better :) 02:50, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

This is georgious. <3 Possibly make the shading more brown and for the sake of matching the other images, make the cream that's shaded... more creamy? oWo 09:14, 01, 08, 2012

The cream's fine. It's just shading... 09:59, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

The thing is...the shading is tinted. Paleh (I think) who made her leader image, I could ask for the hex code of the shading tint since that's kind of difficult to pick off of the image :P At least the shading isn't black like last time. 16:53, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck a little. Breeze whisker  20:28, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

What the heck? I tried to post like two times, and I thought it wen through... 0.o anyways, the shading color is just the base brown color set to multiply. 00:25, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be pale gray and shading needed to be defined. OA was Goldencloud with tweaks made by Appledash and Wildfire. I don't know if I made her too dark or not, so yeah... And something weird happened with the earpink, so I'll fix that soon :P Comments? 20:02, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the eyes just a bit? They seem darker compared to her kittypet image.

Maybe blur the earpink a bit. 20:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

She already said she'd fix the ear pink, Bluestar. There's no need to remind her.

Lighten the shading. 22:55, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the haunch and belly "hightlight" into the pelt more. 14:15, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the eyes and the shading, fixed the earpink and blended the belly and haunch highlights, 16:01, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and blur the belly highlight and lighten the haunch shading. Also, define the head shading. 17:00, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you change the ear pink color to #7D5050? I had to fix it on the kittypet and warrior, that way you could see it better.

Reuploaded Changed the earpink and I dulled+blurred the belly highlight more, but I think the shading and the rest of the highlights are fine. But if anyone else agrees, I'll make the changes. ^^ 16:18, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste by the belly and backside. 20:36, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got rid of all the waste and I filled in her nose. 16:47, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the body shading and highlights a bit more. 06:56, 04, 08, 2012

Leopardfoot (Ki) - Redone
This fails so much. ;.; Comments would be much appreciated...It had to be redone because it needed to be mottled. 23:59, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Just a preference but make her a tad more "blacker", define the earpink and add some more mottles and define them a bit. :3 09:18, 01, 08, 2012

Re-Uploaded. 14:33, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest a little. 17:14, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:17, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the pale chest and made the marking not so...vertical? Breeze whisker  20:27, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. 11:04, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste on his right side. 20:19, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Troutclaw (E) ~ Tweaked
I tweaked him to have a matted head. ihatelineartedits   07:46, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you fix that ear pink and make it stand out a little less? Perhaps blur it?

Okay nobody eat me I was gone for the vote, but could the stripes on this be redone, maybe? They aren't realistic at all and they look kinda overblurred. .-. Breeze  whisker  03:26, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Bah, I'm withdrawing. 04:13, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Taking over, Re-uploaded 04:38 Sun Aug 5

Thin out the lineart and fix the ear pink. Still looks like a blob. x.x

Runningstorm (W) ~ Tweaked
Ickickick. -hides- I haven't actually done a warrior in a long time xD Anyways, I darkened the shading and made the earpink less red. OA was me. this fails. 10:58, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading, and define the pale chest. 11:02, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink and define the light source. I <3333 your tabbies, Splook  11:19, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Well, I'm glad you like my unrealistic messes <3   14:43, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pale chest, smooth out the shading, lighten the shading and blur it. 14:52, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. 20:46, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:38, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Shadepelt (E) ~ Tweaked
Blurred the shading. OA is Breezey.

Blur the "highlight"/shading a bit more. 03:19, 05, 08, 2012

I'm not entirely sure I can do that. I think it's fine, but if others want me to do it, I will.

Fernpelt (A) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading. The most recent OA was Scarlet. 20:31, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Fernpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading like the apprentice. As stated above, the most recent OA was Scarlet. 20:31, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom edge of the ear pink, please.

Enlarge the shoulder and haunch "highlights". 20:36, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:53, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the shoulder one more and make them more of a natural circle. 22:56, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading too. 14:02, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (WC) (W) ~ Redone
Multiple issues. Oa was Ashshadow with a redo by me. 04:12, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

I love this image, and don't get me wrong but...Did this image really need to get redone? The last version was completely fine to me - no issues. It could've just been tweaked to look more gray, less blue. 06:54, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (WC) (MC) ~ Redone
Same as the warrior. Oa was Nightfall101 with a redo by me. Everything is the same as the warrior except the herbs. 04:12, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

I love this image, and don't get me wrong but...Did this image really need to get redone? The last version was completely fine to me - no issues. It could've just been tweaked to look more gray, less blue. 06:54, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and it had shading and earpink issues. I also made the image darker, and I prefer not to lighten the shading. 06:57, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading just little bit.