Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=For Approval= Take it to the approval page

=Tweaking=

Cloudpelt (W) - Tweaked
He looked less blue with blotchy shadings, now he looks like redone (its not!) Darkhallows is OA ,14:07,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the paws and blur all the shading. 20:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also darken the shading on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:16, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the eyes be the same color as his deputy image? 15:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I know, Im going to tweak it **dont bite me*, Reuploaded,18:58,December 13,2011 (UTC)

How come you haven't changed his eye colour yet? This, as well as his apprentice image, won't be approved until you do. 02:14, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

looool ,20:57,December 14,2011 (UTC)

There's a lighter spot on his butt area, and the head highlight (or whatever) seems lighter than the other areas. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 09:45, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm hightlinks for white cats are not good, its just shading, ill fix that, reuploaded ,20:43,December 15,2011 (UTC)

The shading's a bit blotchy on the body, smooth it out a bit and darken the shading on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded ,21:01,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Wetfoot (W) - Tweaked


This was just a simple tweak, really it was! xD New tabby style, what do y'all think? Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, OA was Bramble, and stripes needed to be tweaked. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

What exactly was kept from the old image....? Enlarge the highlight/lighter parts. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Colors, ear-pink, eyes, all the colors? even the stripes? I mean, the only thing i did was change his stripes....thats it....i swear.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:24, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I just noticed you have 4 chararts up. You can only have 3. You'll have to withdraw one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:26, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just withdrew Adderfang. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:33, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see how this could've been tweaked if you redid the stripes and they don't even looks similar to the old image. Blur the "highlight" on the haunch. 01:37 Wed Dec 14

Here is what i did: I earsed the highlights and shading, then color picked the stripes, erased the stripes, and then re-drew the stripes and re-did the shading and higlights, and blurred everything. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:57, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

NOTE This was a TWEAK, this is NOT re-done, got it, if i see ONE more coment on how it looks re-done, you'll be ingored, got it? I'm SICK of peole saying i re-did it. I didn't I TWEAKED IT. End of story. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Maple, calm down. It doesn't matter if you tweaked it or redid it, as it needed to be redone anyway. Round out and blur the "highlight" on the haunch. 02:23 Wed Dec 14

Also fix the blurred lineart. 02:44 Wed Dec 14

What blurred lineart? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, just for future reference, that's kind of redoing and just color picking from the old image. Not that it matters in this case, like Wildy said, but technically, this is redone... Anyways, I see blurred lineart on the back and possibly the muzzle. Don't know if Wildy's talking about anywhere else. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:09, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

You captured the essence of what I was thinking, Paleh. You and me are brain-buddies. <3 Maple: the earpink also needs to be blurred. 08:11 Wed Dec 14

Kay, give me a bit... my sis had a meltdown, and scared my bro, trying to clam him down....and yeah....Life is greeaat Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 04:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Please dont comment to say you are going to reupload it, just when you actually do. It's a waste of space other wise. 04:11, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:37, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart and the earpink needs to be blurred more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights as well. 01:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken them more. It looks like the stripes aren't even there under the highlights. Blur the shading as well. 02:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt. D) - Redone
OA was Frostheart. Redone for all the reasons the leader version had (and, basically, to match the alt leader). Comments? 02:10 Wed Dec 14

Give him a torn ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:25, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:21 Wed Dec 14

Define the earpink, it looks like that it isn't there. 22:52, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not touching the earpink again 'cause it's taken right from the leader image and the torn ear basically covers it anyway. 22:04 Fri Dec 16

Flight of Startled Heron (Km)~ Redone
Between the fact the colour was wrong, the stripes were wrong, the mud was wrong, and the shading wasn't good, I just redid it. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 01:09, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

She should have less stripes. 19:46, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- 20:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smallear (E) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be blurred and darkened. I also added depth to the eye. OA was Bramble. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him so he matches his warrior. 01:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Oh derp, forgot about his warrior image. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tumblekit (alt.K) ~ Redone
OA was Nightflower; redone as a longhair. CommentS? 01:31, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Why do the eyes look blind? Make the earpink less hot pinkish/purple. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:38, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the neck shading. 03:11, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Woody - Redone
Um.. *Steps into unknown territory* First charart that I've tweaked/Re-done. :3 So...Yepp. ;) . 01:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yay for your first tweak! ^^ This is lovely. Move the fur next to the head over ---> this way a bit, so it looks more like it's attached to the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is why i luffles your skill, this is awesome!Darken his eyes a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

OA? 04:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. That would be User:Flamingomom3. :3 I'll fix this when I get home. :) . 00:19, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (R) - Redone
OA was Darkhallows. Shading and highlights needed to be redone - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a bit 'pinker'? It has a little of an orange tint. :) . 00:21, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:23, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D) - Redone
First tweak (nervous). His descrption stats that his teeth curve out from under his lip. Iceheart said I could do this. OA was Mossleap. Comments? 02:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

They look like flecks of gray fur. Add lineart around them and define their shape 03:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And define the highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:35, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my... erm, I'd say only make the canine teeth stick out, as those are the longest. He wouldn't have his other teeth sticking out unless he had a serious case of overbite. 05:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oh wow I fail!! XD 06:08, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Better! Just move the tooth a bit close to the tip of the muzzle. If you want, look here at this image of a cat's skull in profile to see how close to the front the tooth should be. 06:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you for the reference. This is as close to the tip of the muzzle as I can get it. 06:24, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less red. 16:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  00:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

My eyes may be decieving me, but the lineart on the chest is gray. O.o 05:33, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Your eyes don't decieve. :) It's funny I was gonna fix that but then I had a lazy attack and said "eh maybe no one will notice." 05:44, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteberry (E) - Tweaked
OA was Sandy, and his shading was blotchy and needed to be re-done. Comments? 03:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! :) Lighten the shading. 03:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And blur. :3 Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 03:51, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thankies. =3 04:38, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you bring the earpink more towards the front of the year? It probably wasn't listed for that but I think that should be tweaked  23:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
My first tweak, I fixed earpink, the original artist was Mistypebble with help from Mistystar. I wanted to lighten the shading but didn't. 04:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit, Wild? I know that's not what it's on the page for, but the edges of it seem a little too sharp. 18:57, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I tried I should probably set the blur a little higer but I kind of want to redo this... 23:35, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

See what the other leads think. I think it's possible to tweak the shading without having to re-do it. Try blurring a little more. 03:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, this shouldn't have to be redone. Center and redden the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:37, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I know I shouldn't have to I just can't figure out how to fix the layers. 15:47, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) ~ Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow, I think. Shading and highlights needed to be redone, image needed to be darkened. Comments for improvement? 16:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lighter parts a bit paler. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 02:49, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (W) ~ Tweaked
Jesus, the shading on that image made me sick, so I re-did it. I'll also fix up the MC later on. I am the OA. =D 20:51, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. Other than that... Beautiful! 00:00 Sat Dec 17

Re-uploaded. 00:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (W) - Redone
Ok, before anyone tries starting a riot, I got permission from two leads to redo his image. Honestly, from the old apprentice image depicting him with a tuxedo bicolor pattern, and from the patches looking overblurred and the shading being blotchy, as well as issues with the kit image, I think the image is fine to redo. Plus, other images have been redone on about as much as this. However, if you guys really, wholeheartedly think I have to copy the design of the old image, I will, but I really don't think it's necessary. OA was Flamingomom3. Comments for improvement? 04:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well I dont now about you guys, but this looks way more epic then the last image, it's fine with me. Could you add some white on the tail? I dont know, it looks kinda bare there. maybe add a white underside or somethin there - 04:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with Bloo about the tail.^^

I see no need to match the other image. This looks much better anyways. Makes me like Toadstep a little more now. Keep it how it is. 04:07, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks guys. Kinda have a confession, his design is based off of someone special, bit I guess I could add a white tail tip, though he doesn't have one. 04:11, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! ^^ I like this much better than the old one. Lighten the black just a bit though, I can barely see the lineart. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:35, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Clovertail (Ro) - Tweaked
Original artist is Sandwich989, the shading needed to be thickened, and I though it would look more natural like if I smudged the white and brown, so I did. =P Comments? 04:30, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the shoulder and top of her haunch a tad, define the depth in her eye. This is wonderful, great job 04:31, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks! 05:27, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) ~ Redone
Okay I know this didn't look like it needed to be redone but the lineart was smudged and I couldn't fix it, so here he is, OA was Maplepool, I suck at tabbies but I tried and I think it turned out ok, if you disagree that this needed to be redone tell me and I'll just use the other one and add the tooth. 19:15, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I love this! You did everything on this? You got skill! Tone down and blur the highlights. 19:23 Sat Dec 17