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Cinderpelt (MCA) ~ Redone
Help me... OAs were several artists, I think the most recent was Beebs. I have failed... 18:58, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? 19:01, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reups. ''' 19:05, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Can you make the smoke match mine a bit more? This is great! 19:14, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Define the smoke a bit more and define the texture. Do you want the file, or did I already give it to you? 19:54, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Reups no, I'm okay, thanks. And danke, Hawk. 21:13, October 7, 2013 (UTC)

The smoke needs to be smudged with a smaller brush, as it looks clumpy in comparison to the StarClanner. I also used a 1px brush for this. 02:44, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

There's also smoke on the paws and the back of her legs on the StarClanner, too. I can't tell if you've added it or not. 02:44, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 17:21, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm, it seems like the way you smudged is like, straight rather than curved with the body. how do you do this stuff all on pixlr?! 07:03 Wed Oct 9

I think it's fine, really. 14:47, October 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think the texture could be curved to fit the shoulders and haunch a bit more. 04:33, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 17:08, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Curve it a little more along the shoulder, and define/add smoke along her upper lip. 14:41, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 15:59, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

Did you forget to fill the nose? 😝 05:46 Mon Oct 14

Reups 15:54, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

The smoke continues all the way up the back of the forelegs, and wouldn't stop below the elbow. It would likely stop showing at the elbow, but not before. Also the chest's smoke seems over-smudged. the transition isn't so dramatic and flared out quite like that...look at the StarClanner for what I mean. 01:11, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reups. 13:25, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the textre a little- it's very faint on her other image. 23:59, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reups. 12:00, October 17, 2013 (UTC)

The smoke also continues onto the bottom of her toes on the StarClanner- you'll want to do the same on this one. 23:34, October 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reups. 15:39, October 18, 2013 (UTC)

Are you sure you don't want the .xcf? This still looks pretty dark compared to the starclanner. 23:30, October 18, 2013 (UTC)

No. And I colour picked in the lightest places. 23:47, October 18, 2013 (UTC)

I had texture blurring most of the lightest places- you won't get the real base color, and the texture is the same color as the base color, just with a different layer setting, so your results are gonna be off. 00:13, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

But the texture is on the same layer as the base and smoke because pixlr-smudging-on-different-layers leaves black lines. >.> 01:08, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Reups I tried; this look better? 16:56, October 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reups done now with correct way, separate layers.... all thanks to gimp!:D 20:24, October 20, 2013 (UTC)

Dude this looks amazing .o. Could you curve the shoulder and haunch smudging to flow a bit mroe with the body? The line seem too straight for it to fit properly. 00:41, October 22, 2013 (UTC)

Reups thanks! 10:00, October 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sharpen the smudging a bit more. 02:53, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

I think the base pelt might be kind of dark, and it's making the shading look a little too dark. Also, when you do that, is there any chance of slightly darkening the fur texture? 03:41, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reups. 15:11, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit more. 00:03, October 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reups. 14:21, October 24, 2013 (UTC)

24 hours.

Cinderpelt (Alt A) - Redone
OA was Rainly with tweaks by me, needed to be redone to be a smoky cat. I did my best to match, I color picked from the SC image and followed the MCA image to make sure the two matched. This was a blast to do! Any comments for improvement? 16:36, October 15, 2013 (UTC)

(if it's not showing, http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/c/cf/Cinderpelt.apprentice.alt.png ) 16:44, October 15, 2013 (UTC)

Psst, wrong heading, dear.=P Could you blur the edges of the ear pink a bit?

Lighten the shading a smidgen and blur it. 20:19, October 15, 2013 (UTC)

Would you like to have the .xcf? Your colors look a little darker than what I was using. 01:13, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Still working?

Reuploaded I am, yes! 03:37, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

24 hours.

Skyheart (W ) - Redone
Last OA was me. Redone for inconsistent and unrealistic pattern. I did make her a pointed tabby, so I'm not adding any more stripes. Comments? 03:12, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

Scarlet...this is amazing! :O You have to tell me how you do that omg Add more depth to the shading? You don't have to though. Love the tabby style, eyes and texture... and everything. 21:21, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:52, October 24, 2013 (UTC)

24 hours.