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Blackstar (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I remember my first image. :3 I will somehow finda way to smooth out that shading e.e OA was moi and needed defined shading and the image needed to be lightened. Comments? 22:53, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make his white a little more...white? xD I remember this image being put up for approval. o.o

Lighten the shading a tad. 23:52, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts? :3 When we were still apprentices... x3 23:54, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Woaaah. I remember when this was put up for approval too~ :D Blur the highlight/light patch on the chest. 05:24, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

8D Re-Ups^ 17:06, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

The white still looks gray and blur the shading a bit. 23:55, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lazy today. x3 15:35, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit. 21:05, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

And then define it a bit. Especially on the legs and belly. Breeze whisker  20:30, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sunfish (Ki) - Tweaked
Eh, GOMP is being gompy. Anyways defined shading and darkened. OA was Specklestream. Comments? 03:04, 29, 07, 2012

Define the earpink and the unshaded spots. 17:35, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  09:23, 31, 07, 2012

Define the shading. 21:05, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  07:35, 02, 08, 2012

Lighten up some of the shading on the head. Breeze whisker  20:29, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:57, 03, 08, 2012

Antpelt (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading and earpink. OA was me. Comments? 03:04, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the ear with the ear pink. =P

Define the shading on his haunch just a little more. 19:17, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the back shading. 21:00, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Q) - Redone
OA was me (fun fact, this was my second ever approved image!) I am so glad I could kill this. I redid the stripes and the cream, and I tinted the shading, so hopefully it matches better. Oh, and the markings aren't as blurred as they were last time, though I think some of the stripes may need blurred more, not sure, gimmie your opinion. I hate stretching out stripes on queens ._. 18:00, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 8D 18:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty <3 Blur the earpink :3 19:47, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful! Define the shading a tad. 01:31, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so glad that you guys agree that this looks better :) 02:50, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

This is georgious. <3 Possibly make the shading more brown and for the sake of matching the other images, make the cream that's shaded... more creamy? oWo 09:14, 01, 08, 2012

The cream's fine. It's just shading... 09:59, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

The thing is...the shading is tinted. Paleh (I think) who made her leader image, I could ask for the hex code of the shading tint since that's kind of difficult to pick off of the image :P At least the shading isn't black like last time. 16:53, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck a little. Breeze whisker  20:28, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be pale gray and shading needed to be defined. OA was Goldencloud with tweaks made by Appledash and Wildfire. I don't know if I made her too dark or not, so yeah... And something weird happened with the earpink, so I'll fix that soon :P Comments? 20:02, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the eyes just a bit? They seem darker compared to her kittypet image.

Maybe blur the earpink a bit. 20:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

She already said she'd fix the ear pink, Bluestar. There's no need to remind her.

Lighten the shading. 22:55, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the haunch and belly "hightlight" into the pelt more. 14:15, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the eyes and the shading, fixed the earpink and blended the belly and haunch highlights, 16:01, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and blur the belly highlight and lighten the haunch shading. Also, define the head shading. 17:00, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you change the ear pink color to #7D5050? I had to fix it on the kittypet and warrior, that way you could see it better.

Reuploaded Changed the earpink and I dulled+blurred the belly highlight more, but I think the shading and the rest of the highlights are fine. But if anyone else agrees, I'll make the changes. ^^ 16:18, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste by the belly and backside. 20:36, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Ki) - Redone
This fails so much. ;.; Comments would be much appreciated...It had to be redone because it needed to be mottled. 23:59, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Just a preference but make her a tad more "blacker", define the earpink and add some more mottles and define them a bit. :3 09:18, 01, 08, 2012

Re-Uploaded. 14:33, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest a little. 17:14, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:17, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the pale chest and made the marking not so...vertical? Breeze whisker  20:27, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Alt. Kit) ~ Redone
Wow I really like this one. 8DDD I based the pattern off of Gorsetail's mottled alt, so I think we're good. OA was the amazing Leggy person, and she had to have her stripes redone and stuff. :3 Thanks to ivy for letting me have this one~ 03:31, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and make it more "mottled" instead of just dots? Maybe some lighter texture under the stripes? 03:48, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the color looks a bit off...she kind of looks black and white. Can you balance the color out? 05:03, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Ivy- I got the original colors of of a rl picture of a cat, but I tweaked them to be closer. 03:04, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please get rid of the dots kthx. Maybe more like Sparrowfeather, Frecklewish, or Cedarpelt? 04:32, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think they're fine, Loonie. It's a small blank to begin with, so getting things to be perfect isn't as easy as it seems.

But the dots. Cats don't have dots on them. At least smudge them so they have some texture to them? <3 04:45, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sumo's smudge tool is a pain in the shading area...but I'll see what I can do. 04:46, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 10:01, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (W) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA is 'Teldy. Needed to have it's shading defined, and changed to pale gray. I also tweaked the eyes to match the kittypet. Colors are the same...but I'm not too fond of that shading.

Probably lighten the shading some and blend it a bit more (?). Also blur that shoulder-ish "highlight" :3 09:26, 01, 08, 2012

Re-uploaded.

Can you define the haunch shading while you're at it? 23:32, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Lighten the shading a little more. Breeze whisker  20:26, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Mudclaw (W) - Redone
Not so proud of this, but hey, at least I gave it a shot. OA was Sandy (I think she renamed the file though) Comments? 20:35, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Cloudy told me in Skype to darken him x3 20:36, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and lessen the gold/green; he's dark brown. 20:37, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 21:01, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad more. This is lovely :3 21:03, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mottles and maybe lighten him a little... Now I can't see e.e 21:06, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded:  21:11, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a tad thick, can you break up their shapes a little bit? Namely the main one on his haunch and the one on his flank (I think...erm it's really close to the one on the haunch) Very nice job. Me gusta mucho <3 21:20, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I also lightened the stripes~ And thanks :) 21:27, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smuge the stripes a little more to match the deputy. I figured it'd be easier for you to smudge them a little more, than Cloudy try to find a way to de-smudge them o3o 09:59, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mudclaw (D) - Redone
Dear lord, this is bad. x.x Anyways, I got all colors from the .xcf file that Icy sent me. Eww, I really dun like this. I'm not sure how she got the mottles to look how they do, but I tried. OA of the most recent version was Scarlet. 8D

Try smudging the edge of the stripes a bit more with a tiny brush, and with the burn tool, maybe you could add longer motles that go in the directin of the fur with the same size tiny brush? I think that would help :)  22:43, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 22:46, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Loonie, I was actually in the process of doing that as you commented. XD

Troutclaw (E) ~ Tweaked
I tweaked him to have a matted head. ihatelineartedits   07:46, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) ~ Tweaked
Ickickick. -hides- I haven't actually done a warrior in a long time xD Anyways, I darkened the shading and made the earpink less red. OA was me. this fails. 10:58, August 3, 2012 (UTC)