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Cloudmist (Lo) ~ For Evaluation
First charart! Hopefully this goes well. The turtorials were really useful. Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job for your first one! Smudge the shading and lighten it a bit though. 04:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded (thank you! :) ) - Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:06, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if you're aware, but her base on the apprentice image is pure white. I can't tell because the brightness on my desktop is lowered right now.

There are some sharp white pixels on the <--- front leg (where it meets the rest of the body) and on the other front leg towards the shoulder. Probably just missing some shading there. :P 19:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded My screen was at max brightness, but lowered it now and managed to find the white spots. It still looks sorta white to me, but I tried to pale the shading to hopefully make it look less gray if it did. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the image, for instance the belly? — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  14:38, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light a bit on the legs and tail. 00:51, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure about the depth Shadowbright67 (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe just add a touch more depth to the shading, and define the light on the paws again

Maybe darken the ear pink? Shypaw11 (talk) 21:54, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart on the belly, near the <--- leg. 02:16, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Couldn't really catch the shading off-lineart so I'm not sure if its still there after using the eraser by the leg and belly. Shadowbright67 (talk) 03:57, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Leaking away from the lineart means it's not reaching the edge of the lineart. On the belly, there's white space between the lineart and the rest of the shading, it's right by the edge of the leg at the bottom of the belly. 03:10, January 9, 2017

This is probably minor, but the nose color on the apprentice image is a very different color :) 02:18, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Wavepaw (A) - For Approval
she's waving buh-bye to 2016 too 03:11, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Thank god this terrible year is over. Define the light on the back paws. 02:19, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:38, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear. 03:34, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a little bit? 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:25, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yes, I forgot to say I was going to be gone for this week but I messaged Cloudy 00:06, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) - For Approval
~Patch   feather~   15:18, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just me, but I don't think the tint of the brown matches the other images. It seems a bit too...dark. 01:20, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think there should just be a little more marks with a slight lighter shade so it's a bit like a gradient effect? (what am I even

Re-uploaded I can't tell if it looks any lighter. I used a much lighter brown though. ~Patch   feather~   16:48, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Would you like the file? The pattern doesn't seem to match correctly, as Sunjaw did it a certain way. 14:59, 1/03/2017

Perhaps add more speckles on the underside of the tail, as the other images seem to have a few more there

Re-uploaded Yeah, I think the file might help. ~Patch   feather~   14:22, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

I'm struggling to see the earpink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:26, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be a few speckles going down the leg on the kit and apprentice image. Could you add those? 03:13, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Cricketkit (Star) ~ For Approval
Completely forgotten how to charart >_>

eyes should be orange. 14:26, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups how did I miss that

Remove the white, as she's only stated to have a white hind leg. 18:04, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Smoothened the chest shading a bit. I thought tabbies are allowed to have white paws/chest/muzzle? Especially when she has some white genes (imnotmakinganysense) but if someone else agrees I'll gladly change it.

I'd agree to removing it as well, as from what I've heard, tabbies can have pale parts added, but adding white is a bit of an assumption for her description

Re-ups Does this work^^

They were never allowed to have extra white, dear. It's always been pale. Now, while it looks white on some images, it's almost always been pale... unless someone lies just to get their images how they want them. The pale as you have it is completely acceptable and I actually really like it.

is the nose filled in? or am I just being a blind ass again 21:02, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

It's pink lmao

Duckkit (Star) - For Approval
First original design. ^^ And yes, I did surgically place the short-haired tail onto this one. He's only described with a "straight tail", not a tail like his father, who's described with a "tail like a reed". Comments? 02:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little bit! It looks super cool. :DDD

He looks really greenish-yellow. Can you make him brown?

Reups I was thinking the exact same thing right after I posted it, Jayce. XD Found a different shade that I liked. 02:46, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you shift it just a little bit more? Now he looks slightly orange... but that could also be my screen.

Reups. Yeah, you're right. 02:52, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It's possibly my screen problem or my eyes? But to me it looks like... it has a ginger pelt with greenish stripes?

Reups I could see that for the stripes, but not so much on the pelt color. Probably because I've already changed it three times already in one day. Can I have a second opinion on the pelt color please? 05:09, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I have to agree, it looks more brownish gold than anyting. 05:35, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups You know what they say: fourth--er, fifth time's a charm, right? 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) - For Evaluation
I am a lot happier with this one! I like her eyes. 02:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reup 02:57, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading again please. 03:03, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:12, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the body (sorry that I'm not giving you a break). 03:37, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the <-- side 03:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be darkened - but it's probably the tint. Is the layer on Multiply? Try that if it's not, or change the brightness setting/saturation/contrast setting =)

Reuploaded 04:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste from the above <-- hip all the way to the underside of the tail. 04:42, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:36, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the eye-depth

​Reuploaded 21:50, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of shading to the collar? 00:14, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the bottom of the tail, and possibly darken the shading? 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:24, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading more. 15:12, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:59, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

darken the shading. not define, but darken. somewhere there should be a menu for "Hue" or "Brightness," for example, in firealpaca it's under filter. i believe that's what you use? anyway, darken it. 00:45, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:10, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's actually quite a bit of very light waste all around the image. 03:12, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:07, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the collar shading?

Reuploaded 22:48, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Darktail (Loner) - For Approval


hahaha i'm not living up to the other artists' great art sorry guys

also ill fix the waste above the back later 03:39, January 6, 2017

Smoothen out the shading 03:40, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It might be me, but I can't really see the earpink. Besides that, nice work! :) Shadowbright67 (talk) 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Blend the shading more, please.  12:14 Fri Jan 6 

reuploaded i just realized how awful that shading was 22:59, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the hind leg closest to us. :DD 21:00, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded stuff things insert creative message here 00:41, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the paws, except for the very front one?

reuploaded also fixed where the shading was leaking away from the lineart a bit 23:44, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit! 02:15, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading should be lightened by a teeny bit =)

Fallowfern(E) ~ For Approval


Maybe add just a teensy bit of shading on the two front paws? I know the light's coming from the front so they shouldn't have much on them, but not having any shading makes them look flat. Same goes for the ears. 00:11, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

I think it's a good idea to add some shading on her shoulder so it like connects to the back shading^^

Reuploaded

Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
16:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be two unfilled white pixels on --> side of the tail

Reupload 17:50, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's an extra grey pixel on the belly, near the <-- leg. 03:18, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define/darken the shading on the head a bit! :) 02:14, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 18:32, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Darktail (K) ~ Withdrawn
You now get to experience my homemade shading. After 30 minutes with problems of Gimp. 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Remove the ragged pelt. 02:33, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 02:35, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, but maybe darken the white slightly? I'm not too sure if you should do this tbh. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  15:02, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

why darken white? it's supposed to be.....well, white. 15:11, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

it just looks blindingly white, but it could just be my computer — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  23:33, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

It's fine. White needs to be white, not pale gray.

Should this have texture? The rogue image has texture, and I believe it was first. 03:13, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Also, the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the top right of the right leg (our view) as well as right by the back leg on the back. 03:16, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Promised that I will not withdraw the next one. :> 04:18, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) - For Approval
Why was shading this so frustrating? 00:14, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

It looks as though there's an unfilled pixel on the <--- ear. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:21, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Messed with the shaidng, but as far as I can see, there aren't any unfilled pixels in the ears. 00:24, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 5) ~ For Approval
He has a russet alt and a pale ginger alt, but he was also called dark ginger. Comments? 14:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Dull down the neon. 17:08, 1/08/2017

Reuploaded. 20:03, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs 23:38, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:02, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Clovertail (E) ~ For Approval
16:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading a bit?

Cloudmist (W) - For Approval
will eventually tweak shading I think. All colors from apprentice file.

I know you said you might tweak the shading, but can you make the tail shading less lumpy (there's basically just a part in the middle that's not as shaded as the top and bottom), and try to define light/shade on the legs as you do that? Lovely white kitteh

Softwing (Star) ~ For Approval
I kinda like how I did the shading. ^^ Comments? 22:19, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more and darken the shading a bit :D 22:35, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups  23:10, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail where it meets the rest of the body. And get rid of the white line around the eye. 05:20, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

 Re-ups   11:05, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

There should be some shading at the bottom of her body :3

The patch placement doesn't seem to quite match - her queen shows that the tail patch is larger, and the back patch is a bit bigger

 Re-ups   21:42, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

The lineart looks blurred. - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  22:59, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

 Re-ups  I fixed some lineart that was blurred near the ear. Is there anymore? 23:14, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Redclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
meh  01:20 Tue Jan 10 

The earpink looks a bit different than the other image. Nice pattern! :D 02:13, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

holy crap this is awesome It could be my screen, but I'm seeing the shading to be... light green that it's kinda odd? Maybe shift the tint or darken it a tad?

Reups Yea that's cus it is green shading. I darkened it some, but if you want me to change the tint I can. green shading on a red cat probably wasnt my brightest idea lmao (but thanks)    20:15 Tue Jan 10 

Stagleap (TR) (Star) - For approval
Hello heavy texture <33 19:51 Tue Jan 10

Thistleheart (Star) ~ For Approval
20:57, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten and smudge the shading in the direction of fur on the body instead of...every direction if you know what I mean? I thought this was a gray and white for a second =P