Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Rosetail (A) ~ Redone
Phew. Finally it would let me upload it. (For some reason technical difficulties were happening.. Sorry for the lateness.) The most recent OA I believe would be me. c: 05:39, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. Bbun (talk) 16:12, March 3, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Reuploaded She might be a bit too dark... But I also got rid of a stray pixel. 22:23, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes on her back don't flow that way on the other images. 22:44, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

The light source doesn't make any sense, the shading should be tinted a lot to match, the stripe color needs to be changed to match, and the eyes given depth.

Still working, Misty? 07:28, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ah, yes - sorry about that. I've seem to overdone it on the procrastination this time. xD I redid the whole thing, and I'll probably do the shading again once I get the colors from Beebs. 04:01, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe fill in the gaps on her back with more stripes? 01:48, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps tint the shading to make the color match more. 01:54, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Mousewhisker(Ki) - Redone
I fail. Redone for overblurredness I got the warrior's file from Breezy, so at least the colors should match. 19:11, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge the white more to match the warrior. Be e   bs  19:29, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:51, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (KP) ~ Withdrawn
Not really happy on how this turned out. OA be either Splook or DJ, redone for multiple reasons. Comments? Be e   bs  16:25, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

He doesn't match the warrior very well. Lighten him some and define the boundaries of the grey. 16:49, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. I tried okay. Be e   bs  16:58, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

The shading fades out on <--that side and his body and there's some waste by that ear too. 01:47 Mon Mar 11

Make the white less smudged and blurred, blur the shading a ton, and darken it to match the warrior.

Withdrawn. Not because I can't do him, but because I have other projects to work on, that's all. ^^; Anyone may take over this. I just hope the color will still be derpy themed, eheh. Be e   bs  20:05, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

I can take over. 22:12, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Sunstrike (W) - Redone
Was redone for multiple reasons, and the OA was Iceheart22. May not be showing the change, yet, so here it is:. Suggestions for improvement for Sunstrike? 01:35, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

This is pretty! Is der earpink? Sun is totally striking! 01:45, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

I can see the earpink fine. o.o  01:53, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Wee~ This is pretty! The white on the hind legs is pretty gray... 02:12, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Make the white on the head slightly bigger and a little less blurred/smudged, as it's supposed to be such a major feature.

Re-uploaded Thanks! Lighter paws (The foot nearest to us was looking a bit gray as well), bigger white marking on her head, and last, I moved up the earpink above shading. Might want to give it a few minutes to figure itself out... 02:33, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Toadskip (W) ~ Tweaked
Made white less grey. 23:15, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Honeyfern (A) - Tweaked
Man, this was a very difficult tweak. I tried matching the colors better, I redid the stripes as they were very messy and I couldn't work with them, and it appears that the highlights on her warrior were tinted with somewhat of a honey color. I'm not sure the technique that Stoner used to make the stripes with, but I got at close as I could. Most recent OA is me. 23:41, March 12, 2013 (UTC)