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Furled Bracken (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Comments? 17:09, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and blur the stripes a little more. They look softer on his other images. 17:48, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:00, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there are more stripes on the ancient and sharpclaw. Also, smooth the shading some more everywhere. 18:52, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Okay, I added a tail stripe and a haunch stripe, but if this needs more stripes still then I'll add more. :P 19:18, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I really think you should add stripes at least to the tail. There are 13 stripes (I think I counted right) on the tails of both of the other images, whereas this only has eight, which is significantly less. 20:14, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes look blotchy, and the shading, I can't tell the difference. Did ya smooth it? 21:35, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Well, I sure did try! :) 21:47, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The face stripes don't appear to match the other images

Reuploaded I'm going off of the ancient image. 22:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say that the sharpclaw image is first in the set. 22:54, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah. You gotta match both of 'em Shy. Also, well done on the approved images of yours. I'm genuinely proud of you on your progress. 22:56, 6/06/2017

Perhaps you could give some shape to the haunch shading? Also, the shading seems to be leaking in some places. 18:40, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you so much, Broken! 19:38, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add more stripes to his --> leg or haunch thing? And his like shoulder chest area? It has more on his other images Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded 21:08, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the line art in a few places all around the image.

Can you please redline them? 01:42, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I mean, it's sorta,,, everywhere

Reuploaded 17:56, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the hard-edged lines in the earpink, and smooth out all the shading all over the image, it doesn't look different then the other uploads where I've told you to smooth it out 19:33, 6/08/2017

Reuploaded 20:11, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

For the stripes on the tail, especially the part closest to the body, can you make them reach the lineart? Some of them seem to just stop a little before the lineart. For the stripes on the main body, can you make them taper a bit? 16:19, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:20, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the stripes. 18:13, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little and smooth out that bit of shading on the back

Reuploaded 19:34, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the right front leg. 12:48, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:16, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

I still think that the stripes should be tapered a bit. 19:38, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:21, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hard-edged stripe. 01:59, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pupil? I think you put a highlight over a pixel in the pupil, and if the blank has set pupils, you can't change them. (Unless putting a highlight over the pupil is fine, idk, all I know is Snowed said no changing the pupil if it's pre-set

Reuploaded Yikes! 02:27, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes seem to be longer on his other images

Reuploaded 23:11, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere 00:46, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:14, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear sharper/less smudged on his other images.

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Smooth shading near the rear?(No rhyme intended! :P) 21:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad, and define the light on <-- paw. Also, I belive there is leaking shading on --> back paw, and eye color leaking outside the lineart. 21:39, 6/06/2017

Reups Thanks Shypaw! And broken, the front paw you're talking about isn't supposed to have any light on it. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, maybe add some shading to the <--- ear (just a tad) and darken the nose colour? 22:15, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there is any nose color, and if there is, define it a bit 22:33, 6/06/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the front paw farthest from us. Also, lighten the shading a little bit? 22:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused with your shading placement. The shading on the tail, back, and chest/neck area indicate that the light is coming from <--- (from the right/behind the cat) while the legs, haunches, and head indicate that the light is coming from the ---> (from the left/in front of the cat). I believe you're going to have to switch one of these in order for it to make sense. 23:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I switched around the shading. Is it better now? --ErmineGlow (talk) 13:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading around the belly and definitely the face shading need to be swapped now. Also, define the light on the closest hind paw.

Vec said that if I only switched on of the shading parts around, I would be good. I switched around the legs and haunches, so I don't think I need to swap the chest/belly and face shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I made a mistake (mostly because I was super tired when I wrote that, but that's not important); the head shading needs to be swapped (covering more of the <--- face with the light coming from the <---). Don't only just take my word. That's why there are other people here. I'm bound to make mistakes (like I just did). Danny's got a good eye for critiques. As for the belly shading, I personally think it's optional (artist's choice) for this shading perspective. If you're keeping it, I think it should be swapped so it hugs the foreleg instead of the hind leg. Or you could make it just emcompass the lower part of the belly. 23:28, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

The shading's leaking a little bit on the lower chest and the haunch, and I think the earpink might be layered over the lineart in ---> ear? 22:35, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on his back and some in the upper left corner of the image. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 13:34, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and the closest back leg/paw

There's some waste on the back and above the head. 19:04, June 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Opps, I didn't mean leaking, what I meant was waste! Lol. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 19:11, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There is still some shading leaking on the back leg closest to us. 13:00, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:21, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's leaking shading almost everywhere, see here http://vvcap.com/sJTZiQGhuRX 09:38, 6/11/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:37, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define <--- earpink. 18:15, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:49, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Add some light to the back leg furthest from us? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 23:46, June 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * Not light, I mean shading. My bad. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 01:01, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:32, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the haunch a little bit

Re-ups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:26, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is still leaking on the haunch. 01:33, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

The highlight in the eyes needs to be in the provided hole in the pupil I think

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:10, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste all around the back. 23:22, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:25, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the closest back paw. Not the leg, just the paw

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:46, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten shading a little.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:07, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 20:35, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and the back area above the haunch some^^

Reups Just Re-did the shading because I didn't really like it. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:45, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Defined some of the shadingErmineGlow (talk) 16:52, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest, front leg closest to us, and the haunch. There are also light-colored pixels on the back leg closest to us, which should be removed. http://i.imgur.com/u5QxPBc.png 20:48, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:21, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

This is looking nice so far! Define the shading depth on the closest front leg?

Can you define the tail shading?

Raven Pelt (W) ~ For Approval
The only thing I like is the texture and the colors are from the rogue. -- 17:47, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs and it seems as thought there's some extra lineart underneath both paws closest to us. 19:14, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the texture

Reups I'm...not sure what to do about the "extra lineart" since I don't see any. Could I have a redline, please? -- 19:34, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't know how to redline. I double checked to make sure it wasn't just my eyes and it was, sorry for the confusion. :) 19:42, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

I know it was said above, but the texture really needs to be defined imo. <span style="">23:37, 6/12/2017

Reups --  16:49, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten him up. I can hardly make out anything save for the eye color and earpink, and my screen makes things seem lighter than they are. 00:22, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I actually colorpicked from the rogue so I kind of want to refrain from changing the color --  00:32, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry exwifey but I think it should be lightened a bit too, I can't make out anything. 00:54, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Agree^^ Needs to be lightened

Lightened shading a bit to make it appear less dark --  15:53, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

No, you need to lighten the base. Lightening the shading didn't make it any easier to see the shading.

Yes but wouldn't that be contradicting the other files? --  01:12, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

If the other ones are light enough to see shading and texture, then colorpick from another spot, a lighter spot. You won't be contradicting anything

Reups --  03:20, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Texture doesn't match the other images.

Reups --  22:12, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

The texture just aburptly stops at the legs while on the other images it doesn't?? Unless it is like that <span style="">03:21, 6/19/2017

Nettlepad (W) - For Approval
2 minutes into this image and i said, "i already know which terrible path this is going down." oops. i was right. Life actually sucks 24/7  so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 02:55, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a lil bit?

reup   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 04:55, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

I cannot tell the difference between your last upload Life, so what tool are you using to define the shading? <span style="">07:55, 6/16/2017

reup   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 08:43, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Defines the speckles on the back? They are blending with the shading too well, unless it is just my screen. Burnt I am still so jealous of your charart <span style="">14:29 Fri Jun 16

Define the tail shading.<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 15:23, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

reup so i really really tried and i hope it looks like i made a difference :( this pattern is honestly the real big middle finger to biology and convenience... sunjaw i have to say the same for your art as well... :0   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 05:55, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

reup i decided the change was too unsatisfactory so i tried again. i think now it looks like i got to everyone's critique adequately. Life actually sucks 24/7  so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:06, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Blossom (W) - For Approval
I'm pretty sure putting this up again is allowed, did what was said after the last reupload before this was declined because of lack of work. 13:53, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the neck shading

Maybe also curve the neck shading at an angle or something. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:56, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think if Branch smooths it, Cosmo, it might fix the issue without having to alter it any further. I've had the same problem countless times before and smoothing usually fixes it.

so i think to match her other images better you should try and recreate that "smudgey" affect as opposed to the blurry look they have now. in my personal experience, it will save you a lot of hassle if you redid the patches with the style of the other images in mind and smudge them towards the flow of the body with a hard edged 1px brush (i think thats what the OAs of the other images did?). ofc if you dont wanna redo the patches thats perfectly fine, it's just i think it will be more convenient to do so since it unfortunately, as much as it'd look nice as a stand alone image, doesnt really match the other present images rn   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:13, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smoothing it didn't really make much of a difference, so I just angled it a little bit like Cosmo said to do and smoothed it quite a bit. I didn't totally redo the patches, but I smudged them more. 17:50, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the closest front leg shading

Reuploaded 19:59, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Mind smoothing out the neck shading a bit more? Also Re: your comment from before Danny commented. Sometimes smoothing it out does fix the problem, but it appears in this case it didn't. I just know what a pain tweaking shading to curve more can be, so I tried to see if there were other ways to save you what can be quite an annoyance; I've had to do that a lot to my earlier images.

Reuploaded 16:44, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Ok so, I recommend lowering the opacity of the neck shading. Sometimes blurring it over and over or curving it (especially on white cats) doesn't work. In this case I feel like you should lighten it and it might do the problem.

Rain (TAQ) (Alt R) ~ For Approval
... this looks extremely creepy. Anyway, this is an alt for the missing eye, but everything else is the exact same as the other image, since I was told I could do that like it is in Percy's case

There should be pale fur covering it

Reuploaded there is pale fur covering it and the surrounding area^ I changed the color a bit, but it's definitely there

I feel like the eye socket should be there still. I know the eye is gone, but the socket should be left behind imo <span style="">21:18, 6/16/2017

I agree with Broken. 21:48, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

no, it shouldn't. it literally says it covers where it used to be. that goes against he description. 22:04, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, didn't see that. It's fine then. 22:12, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the scars or something? it kinda looks like a streak of pink paint (sorry if this is offensive :T)

Would adding lineart to represent the fur covering the eye be a good idea, or nah? I'm not totally sure, but wanted to pitch the idea.

Think so. Because just a patch of color seems strange imo. Hoping I don't sound offensive <span style="">06:03, 6/17/2017

yeah i agree with using linear art. or if spookycat doesn't wanna do that she should at least make the scar a more defined shape :)   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:14, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, the description doesn't say scar, and just says a patch of pale fur, so there's a limit to how scar-ilke I can make it without being contradictory.

Just gonna say, so I don't have to tweak it later, we just approved a tweak nomination for the Tribe Rain for removing the pupil because he has a missing eye, and the pupil shouldn't be there. Isn't this the same case or something, because I just added the pupil back in and just covered it with pink but he has a missing eye too

That's why I personally believe the socket should be left, but pale fur covering it. <span style="">22:03, 6/17/2017

But if it says pale fur is covering it, you won't be able to see the eye socket.

Then prehaps there should be a little indent to show where the socket would be? Like a tiny bit of shading? <span style="">02:36, 6/18/2017

Reuploaded Yeah okay thats what I originally thought, so I removed the socket again. Also, I added a tiny bit of shading where you suggested, but the description itself says pale fur covering where the eye was and adding too much there would darken it and therefore make it not pale anymore.

Cedarpelt (RC) (Star) - For Approval
Idk. <span style="">19:34 Sat Jun 17

Lighten up the shading on the head, or at least smooth it out a little bit. Also, I think the stripes are a little bit thinner on the warrior and kit images. 19:43, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading and stripes. I didn't like the way it looked anyways. <span style="">19:56 Sat Jun 17

This is probably because of the shading, but I'm having a hard time seeing if the entire muzzle and neck is pale? Ignore me if it's just the shading though. =P

It is the shading lol. <span style="">16:04 Sun Jun 18

Nettle (DTC) (W) - For Approval
This was matched to the rogue. 21:56, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the ear <span style="">21:59, 6/17/2017

Yeah, I saw it and I already removed it. 22:00, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink 22:08, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:28, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think the pale part on the chest is just highlights on the rogue, but you might want to ask the OA about it. 23:22, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think that's just a highlight. If it is, it's a really thick one, so thick that it obscures the texture and everything. And the color there is much lighter than any of the other light parts of the image. But I'll ask Sorrel about it anyway. 23:56, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

I think Sorrel is inactive. If that's the case, then the loner and ES would have to be tweaked to match the rogue. 00:05, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Sorrel still comes around from time to time, so I think it's worth an ask. And as far as the other images, the chest is covered in shading on the loner, and I think there might actually be a bit of a pale chest on the ES? I mean, I don't want to get yelled at for asking for a second opinion, but I would like to hear what others think before I change it. 00:15, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

They can't possibly be highlights, as the rogue has a pale muzzle and chest and that is clearly not highlights. <span style="">03:13, 6/18/2017

It's still better to ask first, instead of assuming. If it turns out Branch is correct, then Ivy can remove it. It feels like you're forcing Ivy to change something/edit it without first finding out if what you're trying to get her to do is even correct.

Flower Foot (W) - For Approval
GOD WHAT WAS I THINKING WITH SMALL BLANKS. It makes filling things in damn impossible. All colors from the kit.

She's cute. Possibly define the shading depth on the back a little bit <span style="">15:03, 6/18/2017

Re-uploaded. Also tweaked it in a few other places.

Could you make the earpink lighter, to match? 15:42, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

I got it directly from the .psd for the kit??? My noses and ears always match in pink coloring, and I got it directly from the nose. I'm the OA of the kit... It only looks different due to shading placement changes from the kit to the warrior.

Dew Petal (W) ~ For Approval
shrug emoji 15:44, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the front paw closest to us prehaps. Love it Skt^ <span style="">05:15, 6/19/2017

Whitefang (Star) - Declined
This succs but here he is

Whitefang's name isn't on the list that's cited on his page. =\ imo that cite isn't valid.

Double-checked again. He is not mentioned, therefore that cite does not count. Declining.

Hecking darnit.

Wait, we've used cites in that format as valid before though??? There's plenty of cats who have their StarClan cite from that one post.

(Two examples being Timberfur and Lilystem)

Lilystem and Timberfur's names are on Su's list - Whitefang isn't mentioned ^^