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Frog (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to add mottles. OA was Trunktail. Storm &#9835;  23:23, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, please.

Also, he needs stripes. 18:04, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

reups Storm  &#9835;  22:21, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

define the mottles, i cant see any at all. HotTeacher69 (talk) 22:22, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad on the --> side haunch/hinleg. I can't even see the pattern through it 10:19, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the paw shading? 17:48, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 23:28, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) ~ Tweaked
OA is Ashshadow and tweaker is Stoneclaw. Tweaked for flat shading. 23:24, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs a tiny bit more.

Reupload You mean shading? I defined the shading cause it was still hard to see. 22:16, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

There's something off about the shading. I can't exactly put my finger on it but the shading on the neck looks a lot less blurred than the shading on the back and haunch. Do you mind thinning that part out? 02:16, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:54, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

No, I meant the light, not the shading. The legs look like they're almost all in shadow.

Reupload 04:31, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you maybe get rid of some of the shading on the muzzle? His neck's supposed to be in shadow, not his muzzle. 17:49, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

And define the light on the tail? 18:31 Mon Sep 7

Reupload 22:09, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

the source is still a bit off. The muzzle itself shouldn't have any shadow at all- it should be the normal warrior/deputy source. aka, the one I use most commonly. The neck should be shaded and it should also go up on the top part of the head, by the ears. This way was a style that I used to use, and then I was told that it doesn't have a proper source and I needed to tweak it.

Reupload I pointed out the light source was a bit off during the nomination and someone told me it's fine. :/ so no idea what happened there really. I was just following the shading. 03:29, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add some shading right where the throat slopes down? If I make any sense. If I don't ask me for a redline. 03:35, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes with the redline, I thought I have the throat covered. or I'm just tired XD 03:50, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

http://www.ezimba.com/work/150908C/ezimba12156977645100.png Sorry I had to screenshot my entire screen. Gyazo isn't working for me, and I don't know why. Anywyas the red part is where I think you should have shading. Sorry if its a nitpicky thing. You don't have to do it. But great work anyways :) 04:02, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thnaks. :) I think that stretches the shading too far. I'd like a second opinion on it if no one minds. 04:15, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

You asked for an opinion, and she provided it. I fail to see the need for a second opinion when she's absolutely correct. The shading should go down the throat to about where Icy indicated.

Reupload 21:33, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

blur the throat shading some more. HotTeacher69 (talk) 22:31, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:01, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck 11:09, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Red (SD) ~ Redone
OA is Vixenblaze. Tweaked to match rogue. This was honestly not easy, but I gave it a try. 01:33, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the pale parts more 07:17, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:12, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

It may just be because of the shading, but this looks lighter than the rogue. Also, can you define the earpink - I can't really see it. 13:57, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload It's mostly the shading, but I've darkened the image a bit. 23:00, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

This is awesome. Can you define the shading on <-- part of his body? Or her. I don't remember. 04:32, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Can you be more specific? I mean, the tail shading it looks fine to me, and the left neck shading is the exact same as the other half of the neck shading. Do you mean the <== leg? 04:33, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

That's exactly what I mean. I'm sorry, Stealth, my brain is fried. 17:49, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload No problemo. :) 03:33, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (W) - Tweaked
OA is Goldenpaw with a redo by Mistypebble. Tweaked because of flat shading. 22:55, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Is there any way we can make the ear pink less bubblegum pink?

Re-uploaded 20:40, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Pearnose (MC) ~ Tweaked
oa be fallow, tweaked to be darker 01:08, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

define the pale parts, i cant see them anymore. HotTeacher69 (talk) 07:16, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

can you give me some ideas on how i can do so? darkening means they get obscured, unfortunately 20:26, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I'd suggest trying highlights, or moving the pale parts on a separate layer, lighten then smudge to blend it back into the fur. 21:39, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i am trying 00:16, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blue the pale parts? 20:17, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Spiderfoot (W) ~ Tweaked
totally ruined ;; 06:59, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you please keep my shading, or let me tweak it? I like the new styles and all, but it's not really fair...

Sorry about that. You can tweak it. 07:08, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading and added some depth to the eyes, since this is my charart.

The earpink looks off for a gray cat. Mind fixing that? 11:25, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't even touch the ear pink from the previous version, and I thought it was fine, but re-uploaded.

Can you define the shading? Tbh, I can't really make it out. 14:19, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking along the back. Can you also make sure there is no other leaking shading while you're at it? 21:37, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I thought it was pretty defined..

Hussar (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Rainfacestar and DJAngelCandy. Tweaked for flat shading and the scar 08:37, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you please lighten the shading? 11:24, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:00, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

sharpen the scar, it looks like a weird streak of pink paint. HotTeacher69 (talk) 18:26, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Redone
OA is Bbun. If she wants it I'll drop this. Biased views these days suck. 12:18, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

"Biased views these days suck." Um, what? I fail to see how that comment has anything to do with the charart. Also, lighten the shading a bit and please crop the image so there's not so much dang waste on <-- side of the charart. It's a huge pet peeve of mine.

You also used the short haired blank 13:19, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lol where did the rule of all comments 100% related to art come from. 13:34, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. Also, why are you being hostile when I was just asking what the comment was for?? =/

Re-uploaded sorry 13:42, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Move the ear hair more inside of the ear. These images should show a little bit of the hood/back/whatever you want to call it of the ear, and it looks odd and out of place the way it is now...add some shading to it. 13:49 Thu Sep 10

Re-uploaded Is this what you meant? 13:56, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Are you actually lightening the shading like I've asked?? I don't see any difference in the file history at all.

His chest on the apprentice isn't smudged. 18:49, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

The light paws are leaking onto the tail. 20:20, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Foxclaw (W) - Redone
OA is Honeyfur, with a redo (two of them) by Jenrock. Removed stripes as they were wrongfully added. Russet is red-brown, not a shade of ginger. In case it's not obvious, this is close to Pinestar's shade, due to this being my favorite color to shade. 8D

Brackenfur (Alt. W) ~ Redone
OA's were Night Shine, Iceheart22, and Ivyheart. Redone to remove stripes. 15:17, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think he's a bit too red- try shifting the color to a bit more of a brown on the color wheel?

Reuploaded. 15:24, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you dull the earpink? 19:19, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also added the scar on his flank. 19:32, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (L) - Redone
OA was shelly. This was an interesting distraction from physics homework. 19:18, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the pale part a bit more? 20:22, September 10, 2015 (UTC)