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Minnowtail (Alt. A2) ~ On Hold
I think I made her too dark >m< I shall fix that.... Anywho, she was described with a dappled pelt~ Comments? 23:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, especially on the back ear. I love it! 8DDD 23:17, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes arent showing :c 00:08, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the nosepink. Looks pretty! 8D 08:13, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the face just a tad. Nice job, Fallow. 11:15, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Fallow! C: Define the earpink. 14:47, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks everyone ^^ 16:58, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the belly a tiny bit? :3 04:14, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face, too. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  11:23, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 16:27, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? :3 14:46, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is great and all, but who says that was a mistake? It was never stated otherwise, she could very well be a dappled dark gray cat.... 23:21, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I was thinking, I think that since she was only mentioned once it would be an alt but I think that this should be the main apprentice image and the warrior should be changed. 23:27 Sun Mar 25

Paleclaw's right. We're already having a discussion about partial-description alts, and this would be partial. She already is gray, in this image, just mentioned with dapples. All cats have some kind of pelt pattern, for what I know, but it just may not be visible. Plus, dapples don't make much of a difference, sorry. 23:34, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come cats like Lilystem get an alt. for being described as a tabby? I think this should stay. 01:53, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps Lilystem should be tweaked to a tabby then. Either way, I thought we decided something about what gets alts and what gets added? Didn't we decide that if it's completely plausible then it'd be added? I can't quite remember, but I thought that's what we worked out. Meaning this alt should be declined and all her images tweaked. 00:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Isn 't this sirt of assuming her description? We don't know for sure that she's actually a dappled cat, and it could very well be a mistake. But in any case, if this goes ahead, cats like Mudclaw would have to be tweaked too, and it seemd really unecessary. *Bad at making points* Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 00:07, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Skt's right. This is assuming descriptions, something we don't do here. If we don't assume with genders and eyelashes in the manga, then why are we assuming descriptions? I say we keep it, and if we find out later that she dappled, then we can delete this and tweak the others. It's not partial, honestly. We know she's gray. For all we know, the dappled coat could be an error. 06:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I've decided to place this image on hold until a final decision can be made. This is not to be declined, approved or archived until said decision is reached. 07:05, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

-didn't notice Misty left a comment- Should I reupload or wait until we figure out what we're doing with her? 13:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploading. Cloudeh told me to start up the discussion so... I think this should stay an alt. It was the only time she was described with it, and she has never been described with dapples in the alligiances. 18:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think she meant start it on the talk page. XD But really, since when do we not add descriptions purely cause they were only mentioned once? If we did that, Spottedleaf wouldn't have half her description, Firestar wouldn't have a pale belly, Brindleface wouldn't be mottled, so and and so forth. We shouldn't assume it's wrong just cause it was only mentioned once. 08:44, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the shading on the ear. 01:22, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Since the light source is coming from over there---> the shading would be darker. I'd rather not change it :s 15:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (Alt. MCA) - CBA
It's been forever since I had something up for approval. Trying a new style of mottled cats but I think he looks a bit like a tabby... He was described as a mottled gray tom in Hollyleaf's Story under the name of Kestrelpaw and Barkface was the medicine cat, so he was a mca. Comments? 01:57, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah he does look like a tabby. Isn't this supposed to match my mottled gray version anyway? 01:59, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I honestly have no idea how you did that, it's incredible. But I tried. 02:11, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I can always send you the .xcf, if you like C: Also, I used the pen jitter tool with a darker and lighter shade, then slightly blurred it. 02:12, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'd love that. I PM you my email on facebook. Thanks Ivy! 02:19, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this, so I can work on a rogue. Anyone who wants to take this over, may. I had no hope of matching Ivy's epicness anyway... 20:06, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 06:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. File changes aren't showing yet, I think... 21:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Nicely done, Stone. 21:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this looks darker than my image. It's either the base pelt color or the shading that's doing this. 13:54, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the eyes less neon-y ouo 15:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (File changes aren't showing yet) The eye's are taken exactly from the MC alt, and the shading is fine, Fallow... 15:42, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I love this. o.o CBA? 02:57, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt.A)~For Approval
I don't think I uploaded it right, but I tried. Comments? 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded-- got rid of the waste 18:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I don't know what happened to the last one. It's not in the declined nor in the approved, I thought this was being worked on already. 19:33 Fri Mar 30

No, it's fine. Mounty, you derp. =P

Define and darken the shading. 20:23, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Heathertail.apprentice.alt.png. 20:32, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Defined and darkened the shading and renamed it 21:29, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Loonie, would it be instead because Heathertail has another one? 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, head, and back paws. 21:50, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

When did that get there? *wasn't there before* smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. 22:36 Fri Mar 30

Define the shading, and I think there's waste on her front paws as well. 03:52, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Got rid of the waste and defined the shading 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

The ear-punk ear-pink seems to go over the line thing next to the ear... o3o On both ears, by the way. It's your choice, but if you want to, can you define the depth in the eye? *Your choice* Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, too. And it might just be my computer, but there seems to still be waste, too. Sorry if that made no sense about the ear and the line and the ear-punk ear-pink x3 13:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more ^^ 13:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the back ear. And, optional, but can you add a little shading to the side of the face that's not towards us? It'll give it more depth. 21:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC

Reuploaded--defined the shading, smudged the earpink into the pelt and got rid of the waste 22:41, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste on his ear, back paw, and front paw. 23:03, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink some more and blur it. 23:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this. And try to not upload a different image every time you reupload. 23:45, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--removed the waste and blured the earpink into the pelt 21:48, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Moonshine, stop uploading a new image each time. Rename it what Atelda told you to. 21:56, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I tried but it became a redlink. I don't know what to do! I am sorry 22:00, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

You just upload it as   Just...it works for everyone, it should work for you. >.> Also, erase the waste. 22:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--erased the waste 18:56, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste by the far ear. 01:24 Tue Apr 3

I can't get rid of it. I have tried erasing it 4 or 5 times. I don't really know what else to do. 22:58, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded--I tried to get rid of the waste, but I don't think it actually went away 11:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

It didn't; Do you use layers? If so, scroll through every single layer and try erasing it. If that doesn't work or you don't use layers, I don't know what to do o3o 11:26, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want me to get rid of the waste for you? 16:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

theres waste still on the cat 01:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brackentail, please refrain from repeating comments. Can you smudge the earpink a tad? 13:37, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--I think I got it. If I didn't I don't know what else to do. I also smudged the earpink. 18:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Yellowfang (Ro) - For Approval
Any comments on improvement ? Makimotto 11:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

Wrong file name. Honestly, I don't see what's so hard about re-uploading over File:Yellowfang.rogue.png. 11:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  13:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine...It looks cool this way honestly. I think that shading should be artist choice. Shading can be hard or soft, you know. 13:37, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a kit so this is under evaluation. I think this is over 80% All of the colors are right, it's the right size, and there is no blurred lineart from what I can tell. Just add the line on her muzzle like the rest of her images and make the lineart on the ear a pixel bigger. This looks wonderful! 13:41 Mon Apr 2

Agreed. Makimotto will become an apprentice of PCA, and the heading is changed to For Approval. 15:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

No, she had shading like this before, and that's why her images were redone, unless you want to revert all of her new images to the old version. So, as nice as it looks, you need to blur the shading. 15:55, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Or the other images could get a shading tweak. Honestly, I like this version very much. Really well done. Just try to match the scars on the other images. There's no fur missing there. 16:20, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

While I like this shading, Ivy's right, we already tweaked her images before to get rid of it. It'd be pointless to tweak again, so please make it match. 21:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, the reason why this may look not blurred is because I added someshading where her fur would be all scragley. I tried to blur it really good without the whole light source disappearing. I also was going to add the line, but it kinda weird, but I can understand that you won't them to all look the same. I tried to Line up the scars, and a few are off, so sorry about that too. If you can't see it, here http://www.iaza.com/work/120402C/iaza15663796583500.png Makimotto 22:44, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

No, we want the straggly fur to be gone. As we said, her other chararts were tweaked to get rid of that. Blur the shading so it's smooth, not showing the fur. And I'm not sure you're understanding what we mean about getting rid of the lineart on the scars, but I don't know how to explain..... 23:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

K, I can get it gone... I just wanted it to look good, But I'll change it. And I didn't even see the part about getting rid of the lines. But ok, I'll do it. Makimotto 23:39, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto



Makimotto 00:25, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

Blur the shading more.Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 09:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blend it, too.^^ 15:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! I think there is just a bit of gray lineart on the ears, sorry if I'm mistaken. 02:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 15:45, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink and scars a bit less neon~

Flick (Ro) Under Evaluation
I reserved it and finished as fast as I could. I hate this. Dx Changes might not be showing...Changes are here. Comments?

12:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, but needs a transparent backround 12:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Grr. I know. I can't get a transparent background... when I took the blank from the charart page, it was white... 12:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a proper light source and define it. 14:29, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I can make it transparent for you if you dont know how to do it, ,16:47,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks :) 21:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, reuploaded. Experimenting with fur textures. Gahh, changes ain't showing, look right here. I lightened the neck shading just a little bit. Yuck, yuck, yuck. I also have one without the texture so if you want to see, tell me. 01:31, April 3, 2012 (UTC.

The fur texture looks like mottles. Define the shading and light source. Don't worry, practice makes perfect! Also, blur the earpink. 05:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

All right C: Redone. I made one without texture and one with, but I'm going for the one with texture, even though it's atrocious, it's the less atrocious of the two 05:35, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

The fur texture still looks like mottles... 00:36, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I wanted it to look like that, but I can change it. If you all like the non textured one better, I can make it the non textured one 00:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I know you wanted it like that, but sorry, it doesn't really look like fur, more like mottles. And this is a short haired cat, any smudging on a short-hair would be less dramatic. 02:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

All right reuploaded If changes ddon't show, it's here 03:03, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:52, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767433748300.png 03:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

You'll need to dull down the highlights or blur them or something...I don't think it should be that glossy-looking unless the description calls for it. Plus, it seems unnatural. 06:03, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I redi it :) 18:42, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Gaghhhh.... better? http://www.iaza.com/work/120407C/iaza17767482237200.png 18:45, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened shading, defined light source, fixed blurred lineart and ears. 23:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Onion (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments? &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 14:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please reupload this, then link us to the version in the file history that will show? The images are being stupid and showing the old rogue. Thank you. 15:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I reuploaded it but the changes still won't show. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 16:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/8/8b/20120402160200%21Onion.rogue.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 16:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the black, and define the shading. Hmm... nice work, Aeris. 17:40, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. If it doesn't show when I publish this I'll give the picture. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:46, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza13142513712900.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:50, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the black a little more. 18:20, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza13142517012200.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 18:24, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it even more. You'll not destroy anything with it. ,18:57,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Work on it or it will be declined ,17:49,April 6,2012 (UTC)

Cora (Ro) ~ For Approval
Here she is. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. Comments? 20:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Here's the link to the image. 21:10, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The ahding was bad on that. He's another link: =P

Define the tail shading. 14:02 Tue Apr 3

Blur the shading and smudge the earpink more. 20:11, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. [http://www.iaza.com/work/120404C/iaza17741026396800.png Changes. ] 21:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

This seems small on here, but from what I see on the other thingie up there, maybe blur the hightlights, though could be just me, I had to put my face right to the computer screen to look at it XD I am Your worst nightmare  22:15, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 15:46, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't the nose be black? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 16:03, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 16:41, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (R)~For Approval
Here his is! I love doing black cats so.. Anyways, Comments? 23:55, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Rename it File:Shrewtooth.rogue.png (basically just get rid of the extra .png) and maybe define the shading~<3 01:20, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

I can see a bit of waste trailing off the ear. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 05:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 11:18, April 5, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the shading and smooth the edges. 02:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (D) - For Approval
Squirreldeputy! Getting those stripes the right colour was a pain... 01:02, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more like the warrior. -steals- Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 01:08, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's there, I promise xD 01:53, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smooth outh the floofs to more resemble the warrior? Don't have them stick out as much, but have them laying on each other... if my explination is made of too much fail, feel free to ask for a redline. 01:55, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful! I can't tell if there's a stripe above her eye or not and define the ear-pink. 02:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mind if I suggest adding a scar to her stomach? In Eclipse, her stomach was so bad she had a scar. (From what I remember she did, which is why she can't have kits.) 21:27, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm leaving very soon and I'm almost positive I won't have time to work on her until I get back on the thirteenth. All I'm asking is: please don't decline her. I worked hard to get her and I wouldn't want her taken away just because I'm going to Europe. It's not like I'm disappearing on your guys; you know where I am, and you know I don't have access to a computer or likely any Internet at all. Besides, we're in no hurry to get her approved, at least as far as I know. So, just... let her be, okay? -puppy dog eyes- 01:24, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

This image is not to be touched until Oblivion gets back. Anyone that does will face my wrath. She earned this image the proper way, so it's hers. Putting on hold until she gets back. 14:47, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

After discussing this with Cloudskye and getting Scarlet's approval, we've come to the decision that this image will be treated with the same rules every other image is treated with. There is no special treatment for anyone no matter the circumstances, least of all on such a coveted image. If this image is not updated within 7 days, it will be declined and whoever wants it at that point will be allowed to do it if they reserve if first.

However, please note that there are to be absolutely NO COMMENTS asking for or claiming the image. Please follow proper PCA ettiquite when commenting: no repeating a critique someone else has made, no flooding. Just comment as normal. Thank you. 23:31, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Ro) ~ For Approval
That was quite fun to do.~ Comments, anyone? (Rogues FTW.) P.S. If it ain't showing up, here y'are: http://www.iaza.com/work/120404C/iaza17380217006800.png 06:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. 10:59, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. Nicely done, Thistle. 16:20, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks.;D 22:43, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 15:42, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you blur the shading more on the belly? 16:28, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:53, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading the slightest bit, and I'll re-CBA. 16:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes on his haunch dont seem to match his other images. 19:38, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

? I looked exactly at the other images while doing it, I dunno. And Skye, that's the darkest it'll go. >> 19:42, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Thistly...to fix the shading, you can add another layer of shading over what already exists, blur it to the same consistency, and then lighten the opacity. :3 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I need to learn to be more specific The swirl on the haunch looks a bit thinner then his other images, and the stripes are a bit to spaced with it. Also, the stripe along the spine and on the tip of the tail seem to be edging away from the lineart. It could just be my phone, though. 03:32, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, Fallow, I watched her do this, and it was fine...An image can't exactly match. 15:48, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you, Leggy, I'm apparently an idiot. |D Stony and Fallow, I'm just going to leave them as they are. 16:47, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) (Alt) ~ For Approval
I'm really proud of this :3 Changes aren't showing. 11:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste at the ears. Make her muzzle shorter and extend the line on her face. 13:33 Tue Apr 3

Can you also define the eye color? To me, it looks pure white. 21:58, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry about the white on the side of her mouth. I tried getting rid of it but nothing worked. 23:19, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch and back scars look a little thick. The scraggly fur could be a little smoother. Could you also darken the shading and blur it some? 16:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's defined to the max, but I blurred it. 23:05, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste by the ears and there's a line coming out of the bridge of the nose so get rid of that and I'll CBA. 22:39 Sat Apr 7

Reuploaded I also got rid of that white part near her mouth. 18:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Willie (Ro) ~ For Approval
This was a fail... >-> *flails arms* I tried :P 21:48, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Wow! This is awesome. ;D Define the shading on the tail and belly-ish area. Lookin' good.~ 22:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 16:55, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't really have any shading on the belly, so I only defined it on the tail.. 21:13, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on both hind legs. This is beautiful<3 13:42, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Under evaluation
Okay, I'm rusty at this, and fail at shading, and feel like I'm about to do somethinf wrong, I will add shading after I'm done testing with it, seeing which seems more normal, and yes there is shading on the tail, and yes, I tried to get as close to the original image as possible, and yes, I suck XD, please don't hurt me *hides* Because I'm sure I'm doing this wrong XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:16, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Btw, added note, someone might have to help me with the shading XD I am Your worst nightmare  23:18, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more, make the ear pink less neon, and lighten/blur the highlights. Not bad ^^. 23:19, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lol what shading, the only shading on the charart is the tail XD, and by less neon you mean darken? And alright, going to blur the highlights now XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:21, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I added shading I am Your worst nightmare  23:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it File:Minty.rogue.alt.png? <3 00:26, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's what it is. I am Your worst nightmare  00:29, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oh wait, alright, nvm XD I am Your worst nightmare  00:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  I am Your worst nightmare  00:33, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's not an alt..... rename it just plain Minty.rogue.png 00:55, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  I am Your worst nightmare  01:01, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

No capitalization. Minty.rogue.png exactly. 02:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Well you could have said that the first time. I am Your worst nightmare  21:38, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Not bad, Birdbrain. Blur the highlights. 23:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  blurred highlights, but now the shading looks seriously messed XD. I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  23:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

You can redo the shading if you want, but blur it too, and the highlights. <span style="">02:14, 05, 04, 2012

Alright, I'll have to redo the whole image then, because this was made on Pixlr X3, I'l have to do it after the weekend though, because I'm going to my trailer. -- I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  23:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, can someone help me with the shading? I'll do the rest x3 I seriously suck. I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  00:08, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think.... I think if you let someone take over or help you... you can't call the image yours anymore? You'll get it with practice... maybe look over the shading placement thingy in the apprentice tutorials. 00:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I've tried that, nothing works, I'm just naturally sucky at shading I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  00:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nutmeg (Ro) ~ For Approval
Right, my second charart I've put up for approval :3 Hope it looks okay! 01:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you. Rename this Nutmeg.rogue.png, not having "R" in caps and without the extra "png". Also can you unsmudge the patches some to match the queen image more? <span style="">02:19, 04, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Hope this turned out right, this apparently requires source mode and I've never used it. Anyways, I tried to make the smudge lines a bit sharper and less faded to try to match the queen image. -- 04:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink a tad more. 10:50, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the earpink. -- 16:41, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I re did it to make it look more like her queen image, hope it looks better! -- 23:09, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Lovely <3. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 12:34, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened the shading and made her a bit of a lighter grey to match her queen image better =P -- 15:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and possibly add a highlight to her head/face. It seems a bit flat. 19:09, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added some things, blurred some things etc :3 -- 19:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Forgot some waste x.x -- 19:44, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Very pretty ^^ Define/darken the back shading? 21:35, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the white a bit. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lightened the shading a tad -- 04:06, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded just lightened the black to look more like her queen and lightened the shading. -- 17:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading around the neck just a tad? 18:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded blurred the shading around the neck and lightened the shading just a bit. -- 18:06, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Found a few areas that were a bit to heavy on shading. -- 20:27, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Nutmeg (Ro).rogue.png 09:59, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around the chest area I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  12:44, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shouldn't be anymore waste, and I renamed the file. -- 16:20, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (Alt. He) - For Approval
He was described as a stone gray tom in Outcast. Solid gray cats kill me... Comments? 03:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't he already have an alt for this but just with stripes? 03:40 Wed Apr 4

Blur the shading on the arms, chest, and back thigh (whatever yu call cats' thighs) 06:07, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have mud? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Mountain, Whispering Breeze has an alt for being called a tabby and there are two different descriptions. @Sky, Stoneteller's don't get mud because they don't leave the cave or something, I don't remember the actual fact, besides that they don't get mud. 22:26, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come his normal image has mud? O.o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded @Sky sorry, I got it backwards... xP 01:41, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge/blur the mud some more so it looks less like tabby patches and more like mud? :3 23:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little bit of waste around the border of the image. From the mud, I would assume.. 03:05, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Barley (Ro) - CBA
I tried my best to make it look like the loner, but this is the other side, so I connected to where it went off his body on the loner image. The changes might not show up, just a warning~ Spark  ♥  18:52 pm 08 Apr 2012

Define the shading 21:49, April 4, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Make him match the kit too. 22:17, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights on the black make him look grey. Darken it or reduce the highlights. Breeze whisker  04:07, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad, as well as what Moonshine suggested. 15:46, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to darken on another layer, since I closed GIMP accidentally. Spark ♥  19:47 pm 54 Apr 2012

Looks Wonderful! There is some waste all around the lineart, though. 20:50, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! I think I got rid of all the waste. Reuploaded~ Spark  ♥  21:09 pm 46 Apr 2012 21:09, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's still some waste near the far ear. 16:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded; think I got it :3 Spark  Candy, here I come! ♥  16:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC) There's some more :P 21:10, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I got it all this time. I put a color behind it and tilted the screen and I didn't see any~ Spark  Candy, here I come! ♥  22:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, still waste. Main part I see is above the back. Try putting a neon backgroun behind it to see. 03:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Spark  Candy, here I come! ♥  11:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm I think this looks great. CBA? 20:47 Sun Apr 8

Ratscar (Alt.W) ~ For Approval
He was described as a russet color. Comments? 23:15, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. 23:40, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Up the red a bit please? It looks a bit too close to the warrior image for my own preferences. Russet's a fuzzy color, you can bend it to suit your needs a bit. 23:50, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but he was described as fox-red, and red is basically a dark ginger, so shouldn't he have stripes? 17:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

When I was looking at his page, it said he was described as russet, not fox-red. 19:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Russet is reddish brown, not ginger. 21:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:10, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and darken it on the haunch. 16:31, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading. 23:56, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back~ 18:27, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:21, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pounce (Ro) ~ For Approval
I named his file wrong DXXX I wll fix it ;.; So yah... Comments? 00:22, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink 01:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  02:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes. Make his pupil look somewhere else as he was described with a lazy eye. Make the tooth more visible. Smudge the back stripe and thin it out some. Lighten the shading on the legs farther away. 03:12, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is stunning. 8D Could you maybe at some highlights or something on the back so it stands out that it is more of a stripe and not so much darker shading? Breeze whisker  04:02, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  16:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little more. 01:25, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the haunch shading a bit. 18:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuplloaded *failed the shading* DXXX ;.; 01:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Boulderfur (W) For Approval
DDDx Please comment on this if you want to : / 01:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded there was weird stuff above his eyes. If changes don't show, contact me for link. 02:22, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:24, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to replica the shading on the apprentice 02:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is a bit blotchy, as is the ear pink. Can you even it out a bit? 03:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Round out the shading on the shoulder and lighten the fron of the legs. Breeze whisker  04:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:30, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more. <span style="">02:23, 06, 04, 2012 Reuploaded (here:http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767461998000.png) 03:19, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink a bit please. ^^ 13:43, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded c: tell me if changes don't show 14:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it OwO 19:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink. This is good~ 00:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I colorpicked so I might not change it 12:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...going in a different direction from Rowan, desaturate the earpink ever so slightly? (just make it a bit more gray) 15:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Oh sorry, I meant gray XDD 16:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also, make the earpink more triangular and define the light source. 16:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Still, define the light source. 21:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink more. 22:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. My pixlr is acting up again =_= contact me for link if changes don't show 23:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt.W) - For Approval
woo Mr. Hawkfrost, comments? ,10:39, April 5,2012 (UTC)

Jeez. Tons of errors in TLH. Anyways, define the shading. 15:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

I dont like shadings on gray cats,reuploaded 16:19, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Shading on the feet looks darker than the rest. ♣Clover fern  00:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded 10:06, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the paw shading is still darker then the rest x: 21:01, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading does not have to be the same darkness all around. Still, blur the shading. 23:27, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Snowkit (OTS) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Here he is~ I made his page so I'm super happy I got him! Comments? 22:25, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 83 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:46, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Offspring of Cloudtail <3 Darken the shading ever so slightly. Also, define the ear pink. 22:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Awww! It's so cute! Keep up the good work! --Physicmew wants to eat your toes with mustard 13:55, April 6, 2012 (UTC)


 * Please only comment when you find something that needs to be fixed. 13:59, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:09, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tiny bit, it looks more gray then white. I luff this <3 <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Raineh  <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Pwns all others  23:58, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

If I lighten the shading anymore, it would be undefined o3o. 16:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm still having issues seeing the ear pink. Define it? If you do, I may consider a CBA. ;3 02:05, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 16:32, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Q) ~ For Approval
I do believe she's preggers now. Bleh. Comments? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:12, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, I thought she wasn't going to get a queen image. I remember that I asked if she would get one, and I think Shelly said no. 16:27, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

No, I asked, and got a yes. Also, take a look at the talk page again, I think she agreed she gets one. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 16:31, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less gray. 17:37, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Explodes* Omg so epic! :O This may just be my lap top lighting/screen but darken and define shading =P 16:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good! Smudge the orange color in the direction of the fur just a tad more. 01:20, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't change the earpink cause it's the same colour as the other images. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 02:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the orange and bit orangier; it looks kinda pale in comparison to her other chararts and smudge/enlarge the ear-pink. 03:25, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's this? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:40, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I really think both this and your kittypet version of her (I know it's already been archived, but I never got the chance to say this) could benefit from the use of special brushes to achive the same look. I make the Glalaxy brush in GIMP incredibly small, and used that in her patches after I smudged them slightly. I only say this, because her warrior image was not only smudged. Also, gah, Cherrytail, why! You could have picked a much better mate D: 14:14, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh. Thank you. -Hates patches- I'll try that. ^^ Heh. Sharpclaw. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little taller. :3 23:16, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) ~ For Approval
Yay :) finally done. Although I don't think I did such a great job with the shading >.< 17:21, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

this is over the limit and will be declined. 17:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Not needed anymore, ,17:53,April 6,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 18:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean by "over the limit"? 19:36, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

The limit for numbers of images that can be up for approval is 40 at one time, and this was over 40, but its fine now. Blur the earpink~ 20:56, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Oh ok- I forgot about that. Re-uploaded the shading wasn't defined cause I only saved the shaded version in psd :S gee, I'm so smart. I blurred the earpink, too, which I forgot to do in the first place 23:24, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the tan waste on his back. 23:44, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back paw closest to us. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  00:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded not sure if changes are showing 01:11, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up a tad. 11:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:39, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the tail shading. 16:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded changes should be showing. I didn't Blur the tail shading much because I don't think it was really necessary. 17:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the ear farthest away look tinted green o.O Also blur the highlights and lighten the tail shading. 19:22, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think changes are showing yet... I didn't blur the highlights cause I think they're fine. 19:28, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights look too concentrated. At least lower the opacity on them.? 23:37, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. better? (Changes should be showing) I also made the grayish parts more beige to match his other chararts. 00:56, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think, though it might just be my computer that ther is waste inbetween the ears. 01:19, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I kinda looks like that, but it's just the pixel blank 01:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the highlights a bit more, blur the shading, smudged the ear pink down, and on the tip of the tail there are lighter pixels where it looks like the shading was erased. 03:38, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Going along with the "shading erased" that Pouncey mentioned, it's like that on a few pixels on his left legs, on the edges. 13:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  14:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pinenose (Q) - For Approval
I finished The Last Hope today, and it didn't feel... complete to me for some reason. Here's Pinenose. Comments? 19:16, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 20:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin'  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 01:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around her chest and the right forepaw~ 14:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes should show when there's no more waste. 23:23, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also around the tail, I forgot to mention that ^^; 01:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I cleared it all, so it's okay. 15:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

There looks like there is some waste or blurred lineart around the chest/neck and the front leg furthest from us. (Could just be me). Looks wondeful! :3 20:31, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

...XD Raven, that's what she cleared. Blur the belly shading a bit c: 23:16, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowflight (Ro) - For Approval
Mmm...Black kitty. <3333 Comments? 20:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black a bit and define the highlights~ 20:58, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the black just a bit, otherwise, it wouldn't match the warrior images. Also, I'm not defining the 'highlights', it looks fine as it is... 22:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (redone) because the image was ugly. xPPP 22:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

(Maybe) smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more? 23:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't smudge the earpink, it's optional, and I don't do that. o3o 01:18, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Ro) ~ For Approval
Chu changes showing? Anyways, Clovertail's rogue. It's ugly ;-; 12:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sweet! May be just my computer, but define the earpink and the shading on the back legs. This is great! 12:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:56, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights", or at least make them a little bigger, but it's your choice :3 *steals* 15:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 15:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the back of the paw darker than the front. 17:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

You should difine where the light is coming from, it looks like its coming from three places. 01:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, too~ Oh, and Bracken: shading placement is artist's choice :3 02:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (Ro) - For Approval
Changes not showing again? Here. --> http://www.iaza.com/work/120408C/iaza13655678205100.png 17:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mooneh, this is number 41 on the list xD You nub~ I think a SM may have to decline this. 17:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Now it's fine. 8D 18:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match his other images. Add more and make them lighter. Also define the shading. 19:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

>.> The stripes match /exactly/ from his old rogue, which should have matched his other images. I'll fix the rest, though. 19:21, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry Mooneh, but I compared this image to his other rogue and the stripes on his old one are still lighter and thinner and there's a few more. Also, lighten up the brown to match his elder image. 19:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Try to copy the cave-guard on this one, and add some mud. 23:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I added mud in the places like the cave-guard, and some more. I know it's too dark, I'll lighten it in the next re-upload and fix the stripes if necessary. 13:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add mottles to the mud to create a more natural effect. To do this, use a speckly brush and burn the mud many times, using different settings, and it will almost create itself in this fashion. Also, smudge the mud some. 13:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

He;s got waste around his tail, back, head, and front legs. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:53, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ...I forgot to lighten it again. Dx Yay for join.me 8D 14:11, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I lightened it. 14:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the mud, and give it some texture by adding darker flecks to it. Also, define the shading. 15:06, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the shading in black, as it was a darker brown. I can't smudge the mud anymore, sorry. Dx And there /are/ darker flecks on the it, but I can make them darker or add more if you want? 8D 19:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add different shaded layers to the mud to give it some depth Or would it be height? xD 19:21, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. x.x <span style="">15:01, 04 09, 2012

Amberkit (Ki) ~ CBA
I luffles this. o.o Comments? 21:45, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Aww :3 Define the ear pink over > there. 22:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little on this <--- ear. 22:20, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the neck shading a bit. Cute Amberkit is cute. <3 23:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Since the nose is on the white, could you make the nose pink instead? 00:09, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look red. XD Make them a bit more yellowy? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 00:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define where the light is coming from. so cute! 01:09, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually...just sorta define all the shading (if you want) x3 02:48, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't change the nose color....she looked very awkward when I tried it. 14:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly add one tiny, little highlight to her chest? It looks a little flat. Also, blur the ear pink a little in that---> ear owo 15:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Highlights...eeeeewww. Dx 16:24, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

This is just... aw. Define the ear pink on the left ear, make it more triangular. Great job ^^ 17:44, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blur, define, blur, define. This is amusing. xD 03:07, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh likes. Paleh CBA. 14:34, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Skipper (Ro) - For Approval
Fail (-_-), comments? ,15:55,April 8,2012 (UTC)

Nice! Maybe lighten the white on both the front and back legs that are closest to us, the white on the tail, and the ear farthest away just a bit. They look too gray-ish. ~Fallen 16:14, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the body a tiny bit and blur it~ 18:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded ,18:27,April 8,2012 (UTC)

Purty *u* Define the haunch shading~ 23:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded ,14:26,April 9,2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ro) - Under Evaluation
No! Don't look at my shame! D: comments? 20:45, April 8, 2012 (UTC) 16:44, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. Fill in the rest of the ear with the earpink, and optional, but add depth to the legs (highlights, maybe). Are you a kit? If so this should be under evaluation. Keep trying, this is all right for a first attempt ^^ 21:46, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad, fill the ear with earpink and blur it, and add color to the nose. ~Fallen 22:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I changed it to short haired and made his pelt color lighter. I think I forgot the color to the nose... I'll get it later. 23:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base colour and make it short haired to match the other main images? 22:16, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more "highlights"/lighter parts, (you don't have to) on the face and tail. Just a preference, ignore this if you want. 22:57, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light source, as it doesn't really make sence now. (Sorry if I'm wrong, and if this is sort of what Dazzle said :/) <span style="">03:16, 09, 04, 2012

Make the teeth match his old collar, give shading to the collar, and color his nose. ^^ :3  <span style="">13:39, 04 09, 2012

Heronpaw (A) - For Approval
Comments? 21:24, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww. Fail. Declined, over the limit. x3 21:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, you're fine. 21:37 Sun Apr 8

Ohmygoshsoperdy. x3 Can you define the nose color a tad? 03:13, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Did you forget the earpink? XD But this is amazing <3 03:40, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shadin'. Gawd, Teldy, y u so awesome at this? 11:01, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt. Ro) ~ For Approval
Eww. Sol. Comments? 22:53, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach/back shading. 00:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:37, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (Ro) - For Approval
Comments? 23:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a tad? <span style="">03:02, 09, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded 03:09, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Shorty (Ro) ~ For Approval
I saved a poor soul from doing this trololol. Everything is the same as the warrior. Comments? 00:48 Mon Apr 9

Twist (Ro) ~ For Approval
8D I based her after one of my deceased/missing kitties...so I honestly don't want to change the pattern. Comments? 03:03, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little more? I'm glad you did this, looks way better than the one I made <333 06:09 Mon Apr 9

Could you darken the earpink? Feels neon-ish to me. D'aww Leggy, this is beautiful...but I don't think it's the one we saw on join.me (is it?) 13:31, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy...it is that one from join.me. XD 13:59, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Pine (TS) (Ro) ~ For Approval
http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/b/b3/20120409034500!Pine_%28TS%29.rogue.png Comments? 03:44, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 03:47 Mon Apr 9

Define the ear pink just a tad? 04:08, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (DF) (Ro) ~ For Approval
Could it be? A tabby, completely my choice? *celebrates* I tried to do a certain pattern but... I fail ;.;  Now, on the talk page, it kinda came to a consensus that all Dark Forest cats that don't have a rank would be rogues. But I honestly don't care if she gets a rogue or a warrior (I made both lol) Anyway, she was described as a tabby and since I'm the artist, it's my choice of color :3 And yes, it should be male. Comments? 06:04 Mon Apr 9

Actually, since she was just described as "tabby", shouldn't she be brown? And actually, I think that the tabby thing should just be added to her description, personally. With it she could actually /get/ a charart, since currently we have no color for her. Just mottled. 06:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I don't really mind adding mottles and making this her main image, but I'd rather keep her silver if that's alright. 06:16 Mon Apr 9

Actually, no. I found the cite for her being brown. Sorry. It was there before and Squirrelflame removed it for some reason, but I looked it up and the cite was correct. She's brown. 06:18, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Uh yeah I can see that XP I tried to add mottles, which was hard to add to this pattern (which I refuse to change *took forever* x.x;;;) 06:49 Mon Apr 9

Just a side comment, it's not artist's choice what color a tabby is, it's brown if there's no specified color. Just pointing that out for future reference mounty. :P this is lovely though, I don't see anything wrong. 06:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sdgsdmfigierddfs I forgot x.x; *tired* 07:03 Mon Apr 9

Define the earpink~ *steals* 07:29, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploade Thank you Dazzle :3 15:02 Mon Apr 9

Add a battered muzzle? 18:11, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Ro) ~ For Evaluation
This was unbelieving hard to do. I am no good at tabbies xD. Suggestions for improvements, please! 12:41, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Color the nose. :3 <span style="">13:40, 04 09, 2012

Upload it over the old image and match the desing with other images, you cant just change the patch desing. I dont understand why you choosed so hard cat to do. , 14:30,April 9,2012 )UTC)

Trololol I was actually planning on doing this to save someone XP Define the tail shading. Although this does look over 80%... 14:57 Mon Apr 9

Rock (Ro) - For Approval
I know I forgot to clear the waste, ignore it and comment on something else other than that, and I'll clear it on the next upload. I think I liked the old one better. Comments? 18:07, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Bone (RO) ~ For Approval
Bone, Scourge's deputy. I tried to make him look like the one in the manga, and I don't think he looks too bad. I also thought that, as Scourge's second-in-command, he would have the same dog-tooth claws as his leader. Comments? 18:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add the claws to the back paws too? 18:27 Mon Apr 9

Oblivion already has this reserved. Unless her reservation ran out, then this will have to be declined, sorry! 18:28, April 9, 2012 (UTC)