Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to darken shading, define earpink, and blur facewhite. OA was some crazy person. 23:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and define the shading. 23:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:47, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white on the muzzle some more. 18:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hate the shading with a firey passion. I miss GIMP :( 21:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights(?) and the shading looks flat, try defining it more. 22:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading since they seem blotchy. 00:47 Mon Jul 9

Reuploaded 22:59, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading slimmer, blur it more, darken it, define the white patch, and make the edges smoother. 23:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her front leg. 19:34, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach and haunch shading. There's also a strip of shading on the back - blur that, or remove it, since the light source is coming from there. 14:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing yet. 06:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) - Tweaked
Defined the scar, along with a few minorly minor changes. :3 OA's were Evanphoto (I think), minor tweak by Bramble, Cloudy and Rainfacestar. Comments? 07:10, 09, 07, 2012

Could you sharpen the scar a tad? It'll make it more realistic. 18:16, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  o3o I forgot that tool existed changes might not be showing. 06:24, 10, 07, 2012

Hazeltail (Ki) - Tweaked
Ew... Made the facial marking not go over her eye. OA I think was Rainwhisper. Comments? o.e 07:53, 09, 07, 2012

Can you define the shading while your at it? Skt Omnia vincit amor  02:27, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  06:37, 10, 07, 2012

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Rowanfur (W) - Declined
Redone for shading, and the tabby markings didn't go all the way. You guys said you like the markings on the old one, so I tried to make the stripes sort of blur together as the coat got longer. I don't think I did it quite right. .-. Breeze  whisker  17:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

As always, you never fail to amaze, Breeze. However, the shading at the bottom of the tail could use some lightening to benefit the picture, and the back shading overall could be lightened. 17:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The back shading seems fine. It shows lots of depth like this... 17:57, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. <3 Breeze  whisker  18:52, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't be mad, and since this is just a suggestion you can choose not to, but this doesn't really look like the old pattern at all and we all expressed interest in keeping it. Is there any possibility of you doing that? 20:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm inclined to agree with Ivy.. I quite liked the older pattern, and there really wasn't much wrong with the older style. I respect the choice if you want to keep it how it is, though. ^^;;

Define the eye values. 21:14, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, how? Do you want me to get rid of more stripes? .-. Or if you're talking about it being long haired, I did that so that the fading stripes would make more sense. Breeze whisker  03:56, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, basically make him a pointed tabby like before. 04:28, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. I'd rather not. I'll blend a few more stripes together and stuff, but I'd rather not make him an actual tabby point. Breeze whisker  18:24, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

That was one of the conditions when this was nominated, Breeze. We asked that you keep the pattern the same.

One of the reasons why I nominated it in the first place was that the tabby pattern needed to cover all of him. Heck, that's the main reason I nominated it. If you really wanted the pattern to stay the same, it could have just been tweaked for blurred shading. I also cannot find a cat with genuine ginger tabby point markings (not just stripes blurred out on the back due to long hair) that is not white or that creamy Siamese color. Breeze whisker  00:44, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Then perhaps this should have been just a tweak. It was requested that the pattern stay the same though. If you don't want to comply with that, this may be declined. 01:31, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

A request doesn't mean it has to be done. That's why it's call a request and not a command. Whatever. Decline it if you like. I'm not going to argue any furthur. Breeze whisker  04:30, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Fine. Declining.

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanfur (KP) - Redone
WOOHOO I FAIL. Same as the warrior^ OA was Ashshadow. 21:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it's not that dark on the warrior. And kill the waste. And shush, you don't fail. This is /wonderful/, as always. 21:05, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. x.x 21:12, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the lighter part on his foreleg? And Loon. >:| What'd I say I'd do if you didn't admit it was awesome? I'd call you a liar and slap you with the frozen butterfingerz (Then proceed to let you keep it but...)  23:35, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:34, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define/add shading on his back paw maybe? Skt Omnia vincit amor  22:45, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add another tear in his left ear to match the warrior. 00:54, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Paleh, since his ear is facing sideways (you can't see the earpink), you wouldn't be able to see both tears. 01:37, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Loonie, go ahead and make this match the old pattern.

Swallowtail (WC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Shading needed to be redone, plus I darkened her to match the apprentice. Most recent OA was Iceheart. 17:03, July 10, 2012 (UTC)\

O.O You made a new file. Enlarge the earpink on <-- That side. 17:04, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the file name, even if the image isn't showing >_>. Also just did the earpink. 17:09, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad.

Leopardfoot (A) - Tweaked
OA was some epical Guildmaster. Added mottles 18:27, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and make it match her warrior? 20:18, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  03:21, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and (I think) make the mottles smaller to match more. 05:50, 11, 07, 2012

Rainfur (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, shading needed defined. I'm thinking the stripes might need to have their opacity lowered a tad to match the loner, but that's for you guys to decide 21:47, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think if you blurred the stripes a little, they'd match just fine. Breeze whisker  00:48, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be mottled. I made him match the alt I made as best as I could, of course not exactly so the pattern could fit the curve of his body. 21:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I know this wasn't why it was up for tweaking, but may you please darken the shading? 22:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make some parts of the mottle more darker. 05:53, 11, 07, 2012

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just darkened it to match the other images. Latest change was made by Misty. Comments? ^^ 00:07, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Misty already did this tweak. It doesn't need to be done again... 01:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Misty's tweak was declined due to the one week limit, but it was never reverted. Cinder, blur the stomach shading, please.

Oh, Ok. I just thought it was approved since it was never reverted. :P Darken the highlights a tad. 04:26, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt. L) ~ Tweaked
OA was Specklestream, and the highlights needed toning down. I also tweaked the shading in the process. Color may have gotten a little..changed...in the process though. I also added depth to the eyes, since they were just one solid color. e.e

This is very minor, but make the white specks in the eyes on the same side. Either both on the left, or both on the right, not one on each side. 00:33, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur the leg shading a bit 01:36, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. But, if others disagree, I'll fix it.

So much better than mine *Bows to Cloudy's epical superiority on solid colored cats* Define the light on the face a bit more 02:06, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love my solid cats, what can I say? xD

Might just wanna blur the tail shading a teeny bit. 05:59, 11, 07, 2012

Nah, I'd rather not...but, if others think I should, then I will.

Oakheart (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Dewstar, and it needed to match the alt deputy. I think the shading might be a tad too dark...

Lighten it up, it still doesn't match the alt deputy's color. 00:31, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Lighten the shading a bit. 06:04, 11, 07, 2012

I think it's fine.

Willowpelt (Q) - Redone
Trying out a new placement for queen shading... hope this works. Needed to match other images, OA was Twitty. Got the layers from Mounty, so all the colors match. Don't ask me to change them. Comments? 00:25, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you change the light source on the tain to the top so that it matches the rest of the image? Breeze whisker  00:46, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm assuming you mean tail? And the light source is coming from the top left corner. The tail pretty much does match it. The only other place I could put the lighter area, would be on the other side of the tail, which wouldn't match the light source. This is about as close to the "top" of the tail as I can get. 00:56, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, hehe yes, the tail. Then maybe extend the shading a little from the rump on the bottom of it? Breeze whisker  01:04, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - That's the best I can do. 01:12, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Willowpelt (Ki) - Tweaked
I know this was meant to be redone, but looking at the original image, I figured it could be tweaked. Just darkened the image a tad, added a layer of shading so it was more defined, then fixed the eyes and earpink to match the other images. Same reasons as queen. OA was Teldy I think. Since I didn't have all the layers on this, I don't have the colors, but comparing the base layer, it does match the colors mounty, sent me, soo..... comments? 00:28, July 11, 2012 (UTC)