Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define/darken the shading a little. -- 04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of like the stripes on the white, even if it isn't conventional. There's some blurred lineart on the ear. Define and brighten the earpink.  ❀ wild  heart ❀ 04:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Man HOW do you do that? awesome! But darken the shading. 04:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks :). Comments? Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  17:46, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wow this is awesome work I love it! Yes, I can't see ear pink, can you define it? Leaf-storm,17:49,September 25,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Thanks Leaf ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  18:07, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, I looked on the charart cearfully and I think there can be some more ear pink colour on the white tip of ear. Only a little. It's looking like she have ear only on orange part. Leaf-storm,17:31,September 26,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular too. 23:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 03:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah It's awesome (want help) Leaf-storm,14:18,October 1,2011 (UTC)

Yes, I can't figure out what you mean Leafstorm D:. Itt's just me and my stupidity acting up again xD Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  00:47, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink, make it brighter and more triangular. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * forget it* right? :-) Leaf-storm,9:10,October 2,2011 (UTC)

Elorisa, this hasn't been re-uploaded since the 25th of September. If you don't re-upload soon, I will be declining this. It's just taking up space. 17:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, sorry, I'll reupload it today. Personal life has been impeding, and that's a bit more important than charart. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:05, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload it? Too lazy to check the file page... Make the earpink bigger. 00:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think you may have blurred some lineart on the ear. And make the earpink more triangular. It's kind of smooshed against the lineart. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:26, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:07, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little strange when it's layered over the transition between white and ginger. Maybe make the ear completely ginger and then put to the earpink on. 03:50 Thu Oct 6

I think it looks fine; I've done other cats with there ears like that. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  14:54, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart and lighten the stripes on the white transistion. 16:59, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, better~? -- Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  21:28, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (W) ~ Redone


Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?

Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now lighten it and add more shading all around. 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch -- 01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Sorry this took so long, I lost his shading layer, so i had to re-make his shading layer, and then, i rushed it, and got this....^^; Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and blur the highlights. 14:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Wow....that was fast ;D Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred more. 15:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-it has now been blurred to a max. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, it still needs to be blurred and blended a little more. 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried, had like 1% affect every here and there, but not much.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:26, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, I have some advice for you that helped me before I learned the other-worldly powers of the guassian blur tool. If you smudge the shading a lot with the second-to smallest or third-to smallest brush, then blur it on 100%, that actually helps to make the shading have a natural gradient. 00:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

.....What? I'm sorry, i'm diselxic..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 12:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

What don't you understand? You use layers, yes? 21:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

He still seems kind of shiny. Maybe dull the highlights a tad? Sky- Killer of Daleks and Cybermen 22:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy....I don't understand any of it, and No, i don't..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The shading. It needs to be blurred. 22:57, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

sighs* Alright, let me try to rephrase it (it's going to be more difficult since you don't have layers) The smudge tool (which is a hand with the pointer finger sticking out) is what you need. Use it like you would normally do to something to smear it, make it go back and forth. Then, take your blur tool. There should be a setting somewhere that has a bar and some numbers, it should say "Rate", slide it to the right until it says 100%. It should really help smooth your shading out a lot. This should be much more informative, yes? 03:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, i got it that time :) I'm sorry....I can understtand things that well, and then i get sonfuesed, and then i get mad, and then i kill a pillow.....DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the shoulder, move it up a bit, darken the highlight on the haunch, and blur all the shading and highlights. 03:51 Thu Oct 6

Okay, give me some time, my laptop is being spazzy, so, let me get it squared away, or let me buy a new one, give me like two or three days, 'kay? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, my laptop is fixed now, give me sometime, all right? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

No. Maplepool, I'm sorry, but we can't wait forever. Either fix this or withdraw this. 14:00, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Now blur the shading. 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Chest shading needs to be blurred and lightened. 11:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

^ Looks like someone forgot to sign! 00:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:44, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; other than that, I think its awesome! =3 21:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC)~ Tweaked
The patches needed to be smudged more like the other images. I also made the ear pink bigger, and changed the nose back to black. 01:50, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Change the nose back to pink. It's part of her description. 01:57, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make her mottled, and define the stripes on her tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:01, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Did you re-do this... 21:42, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Why did you delete two of your own messages, Icestorm? 21:46 Mon Oct 3

Oops. x3 I said - darken the hue of the eye color and who was the OA? ;) 22:11, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Icey, we're not starting something else. Not here. Take it up with her elsewhere. Darken the shading a tad. 23:05, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- After Kitty's message everyone knows who the OA was. And no i didnt redo it. 22:50, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can I ask how you managed to make the pelt look like that if you didn't re-do it? I'm curious, because I like it. 22:51, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Colour pick and float (under select) then you can do whatever without messing up the lineart. I just smudged them. I used to do it with all my images, up until Echomist when i acctually started saveing layers. 22:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

It looks nothing like my image...:| Darken the shading. 23:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Dont you think if i redid it i would be claiming it as redone? 23:18, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh acctually nevermind. That was a redone version. Didnt do it on purpose. The right versions up now. 23:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

...but you did. Lighten the shading. 23:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-...I was ging to. But then in a show of good faith to the new rules, i just tweaked it. This is yours with my tweaking. 23:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ;D 23:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the earpink a bit, too. 03:52 Thu Oct 6

Like Cloudy said, don't start anything here, take it somewhere else. This is supposed to be a nice, friendly project. I don't see that she has a mottled face yet, and it says she has a dappled coat, I'm not exactly sure if that's the same as mottled or not, but if it's what I think it is then add dapples to her fur. 14:44, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

All i did was define the ear pink. I cant dapple/mottle it without redoing it, and even if i make it look bad with mottles and dapples like this the others will also have to be tweaked. -- 23:11, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Then, we will tweak them, not a problem, and you can do it w/o redoing it, i did with Rainstrom, just add highlights and shading with a small sized bruah (five or Nine) and smudge them a bit, then blur, it won't redo the image, only reason Pebblefoot looked re-done, was 'cause I added shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:40, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I know how to do it, it just looks bad. Anyway gave it my best shot and still wishing i could redo it. 04:00, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chest and mottles. Why do you want to re-do it? It's fine. 14:36, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the earpink? It's hard to see. Sky- Trick and Treat 17:17, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Ugh its icky looking to me. But im to lazy to redo it i just want to do a new image. 20:08, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (W) - Redone
I redid the stripes, but kept the pattern the same. It wasn't clear as to why the stripes needed to be change, but here's what I got. Comments? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white and brown meet, and darken the shading. 21:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. And dull it a little bit. Nice job. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better. Make the ear pink smaller, please. 21:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I was getting tired of the old image. xD Nice job, smudge the white into the pelt minorly. 00:03, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and perhaps add a few more. It looks a little too spaced-out. 00:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:21, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earr pink smaller and redder. 21:27, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

And more triangular. 00:41, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- text? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:34, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's still problems with the ear pink. Center it, make it triangular, and redder. 14:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- better? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:21, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (D) Re-done
OA is Mousetalon, needed to be long haired. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink. Looks good. 22:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, and redden the earpink. xD 22:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the shading thicker. I advise you to make the haunch shading darker than the rest. 22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I knew the shading was too light...oh well. Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:20, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, redder, and blur it. 22:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The evil ear pink strikes again. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Its better now. Blur the edges of the earpink. 22:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Try it now. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 02:43, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize the shading more, it's somewhat hard to see. Looking good! 02:59, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How bout now? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Allons-y! 10:48, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little more, and blur it just a small bit. Very nice. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:35, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and Treat 04:59, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderheart (W) - Redone
So it said Cinderheart needed to be done for multiple reasons, mainly to get rid of the Y stripes and add dapples. Sorry about the fail dapples. XD Do I need to darken the stripes? OA was either Sand or Bramble I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:26, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, if you say you fail or suck ever again, some stuff is going to go down. Define the shading on the legs and haunch a little more ;3 The stripes look good, better light then dark actually. 23:28, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a ibt? Also, make the eyes more blue, they look a bit too gray. 23:32, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *slowly backs away from Splashy* But what if it's true.....? *hides* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:37, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if it's supposed to be like this or you want it to, but she looks blue-ish. 00:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my god. Paleclaw. -dies- THIS IS AMAZING. 00:15, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her eye color, it looks to pale. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:18, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yes, it was tinter blue. I usually do that with my chararts by coloring the shading, but I desaturated it a bit more now. And I darkened the eye color. Thank you Icy! *bows* So, no more apprentices, even tweaks, right? Cause I wanna do all her images, but that'd only be the kit if we're not tweaking the apprentices anymore. I personally think maybe we should tweak the ones that look completely different from the main image, since they're gonna sit like that till OOTS is done if not, and that's kind of a long time.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Omg.....this is gorgeous Paleh! You never fail to make a charart look awesome. Anyways, darken the shading a teensy bit and blur the earpink a bit more. This is epic! :3 10:44, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and there are no apprentice tweaks. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:42, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whitetail (Q) ~ Redone
Needed to get rid of the prickly shading, it was on the re-do list. Comments? 00:02, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the OA? :3 Looks great! Blur the haunch and tail shading, and blur the earpink. 00:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I forgot that. OA is Darkhallows. 00:05, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 00:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does she have the FAINTEST stripe of waste on her back? lol, i just read her page, how do you get a PALE WHITE cat? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:21, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I checked, I don't think there's waste. And I know, right? xD 00:26, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she be shorthaired? Aren't all WindClan cats being redone to be short haired? (at least that's what I remember xD) Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

In her description it says that she has thick fur. Therefore, she has long fur. 22:36, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. And yes, usually all WindClan cats are sleek and shorthaired. It's different if they were described as long furred. 04:57, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the clarification :3. Blur the shading on the midriff a tad. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  14:52, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Midriff? Sorry I dunno where that is xD 15:36, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her belly and right infront of her haunch. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  16:50, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (W) - Redone
Meh... Gray tabbies aren't exactly my thing... OA was me. Neither it or his MC looked very realistic so I'm planning on redoing them both. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is ''beautiful. ''Extend the highlights to the tail tip. If you don't have highlights just put less shading there. 00:09, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the chest highlight(if ya use them of course) - 00:17, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm amazed. There's the smallest bit of waste near the muzzle. 00:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks all for the nice words, I'm becoming quite fond of it myself. :) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:22, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 14:02, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Tweaked
I re-did the stripes and shading, and make the scar more redder. Kinda taking a break from Crookedstar's image. I was up all night perfecting his deputy image. Comments? 14:01, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Very good! Could you desaturate the stripes some, they stand out a lot. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 14:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks :) I have no idea how to desaturate stripes on GIMP, so I just lightened them a tad. Comments? 14:32, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The stripe looks a bit blobish, thin it out a tad. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  14:51, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? They're supposed to be thick. 15:02, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a tad overblurred and not natural. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  15:04, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The scar is fine, it looks like Tigerstar's, and he is approved. 15:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also make him more golden-brown. He looks yellowish. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  21:20, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scar the same color as the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:50, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone
Alright, I don't want to hear the complaints about this being redone. Scarletwind stated herself that the warrior image need to be redone as well. The coloring was off between the two, and the shading was a little blotchy. Plus, I tried to add stripes but I really couldn't. OA was Darkhallows, added stripes. Comments? 17:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The white looks orange. Make it white. Lighten the shading, make the strpes thinner and add more. Define the ear pink and add depth to the eye. Define the white as well. 17:30, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've covered as much as I can with these stripes, and the artist who redoes the warrior can copy this style of stripes. Derp, I also noticed I forgot the collar. 17:48, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I never redid his warrior charart, but this is fine. Make the colors match his warrior charart a bit more and thin out the stripes a bit. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 20:18, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the title. It was supposed to say Billystorm KP. Rainface star  Ghost time!  20:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

THere seems to be a small speck of orange on the tip of the tail. That supposed to be there? 22:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenflower (W) - Redone
Next one on her lineup. OA was Sandstar12, needed to be pale ginger and have stripes. I've had this done for a few days, along with her kit. Comments for improvement? 22:45, October 8, 2011 (UTC)