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Thistleclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
I totally ruined it. >< OA is Nightshine, Redone artist is Ivystripe and tweakers are Ashshadow and me. Tweaked tom match description. Many credit and thanks to Burntclaw for sending in the apprentice file, and that made my life much easier. :) 08:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white 08:56, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

K so I smudged my white patches with a 10 px bristle brush and i did not smudge or blur the texture- i used a paint brush and added dark and light tones to show the light hitting the fur and the shadows to give his fur a "bristling" effect. Nice image, anyway =) 09:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the texture on the white please. 09:12, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

why does he have white paws? hes only speicifed white and grey on his face and shoulders. 11:03, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

nvm, cite got found 12:06, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

He looks like hes still mottled, is that intentional? 22:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

That's texture. There is tabby stripes I promise, it's just harder to see because it's a tiny image. 23:01, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more please, with a hard edged one px brush 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload If I have to turn the internet upside down to get a better smudge tool >< 07:21, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I'm going to be that person but I still seriously think you should smudge the white more ;; 13:13, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on his face isn't texture; it's little triangles that just throw the colour off...also, could you add a bit of depth to the shading? It's looking a bit flat. 13:15 Sat Oct 3

Reupload I'm being careful with the shading as the texture and stripes disappear when it gets too dark, and I'm near the brink. Everyone's fluffing up their Thistleclaw a lot! Do I need to fluff Thistlekit? 20:18, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

His other images appear to have a small bit of black near the eyes- do you mind adding that? The warrior and dark forest images show what I'm insinuating. 21:27, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't tell me to smudge it anymore, cause I did before and it somehow disappeared O.o. 21:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

White looks gray on the paws 23:57, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:03, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

I still think it looks gray to me, tbh. Try erasing some shading on them 01:01, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload White against dark is a pain >< 05:42, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

i don't know why but the texture makes him look mottled... 07:29, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the two front paws. 20:36, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I've lowered the opacity of the texture to help see the stripes and smudged them. I completely forgot about the paws so I'll do that in the next upload. 21:01, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make him look more spiky, like on the apprentice and warrior? 01:05, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload spike! spiiiiiiiiike! That's a fun word. 07:30, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

fluff up his left side of the cheek, it looks oddly unbalanced. 11:40, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Uh tomorrow is when it's a week since I posted. If this doesn't pass by tomorrow, (which seems unlikely), will this be declined? 05:12, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

A redone image is 2 weeks. Could you fluff out the right side of the face more? (On the face) 05:42, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:57, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

The texture just looks like random scribbles, and it doesn't match the flow of the fur. Fix it, please. 14:44 Fri Oct 9

Reupload 00:05, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Make the tail more spiky. 02:20, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Nettlebreeze (E) ~ Redone
OA is me. Redone to match. I couldn't sum up to Shinx's awesome skills... :( 21:51 Sat Oct 3

I'll add the rheumy eyes and he ragged fur in my next upload. Oops. 21:53 Sat Oct 3

Don't forget the cloudy eyes! :) The colour doesn't seem to match the other images. His a bit orange-r than the others. (Is that even a word? Orange-r?) 22:00, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Did you add the layer of texture? There's a very light one on the apprentice, I'm not sure if you added it or not. This looks gorgeous. :) The color is fine, I think. I sent Hawky the file, the colors will probably be colorpicked fro that. I use highlights on my images, which makes them look a bit brighter. 22:10, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 01:17, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading's fine. 01:23, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, Shinx. I used texture. I made sure you could barely see it, because you can barely see it on the apprentice. 3:03 Sun Oct 4

No, it's really not @Apple. Please smooth it out some more on the legs 03:04, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

In my opinion it is. Literally it looks blurred as it is but if someone else disagrees then I guess. 03:05, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is fine, tbh. 03:06, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also I did color pick off of the apprentice .xcf 3:14 Sun Oct 4

Blur the shading on the earpink? This is beautiful. 22:34, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make it a bit lighter to match the apprentice and kit? It looks a bit too dark atm, and could you lighten the tail where they have lighter parts? It blends to much with the original pelt color 16:01, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

The reason the pelt looks darker is due to the shading, and that also applies to the tail. I colorpicked off of the .xcf of the apprentice. As for the earpink, I will get right on that. 23:33 Thu Oct 8

Actually if your light source is comin from where i think it is, the top of the tail would show some light in that aspect 19:57, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Got it. 21:52 Fri Oct 9

Are you able to lighten the well, 'light' parts of the tail? 22:01, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (W) ~ Tweaked
Second try.

Blur the shading some more and define it on the most unvisible paw. 18:10, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups

Blur the shading more, please.

Tornear (Star) - Tweaked
OAs are Ruefrost and me. Before you kill me, I was given permission to tweak the other stuff, and this is my image, so I added some eye depth. 14:59, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

You asked me if you could tweak the shading and it also looks like the texture or whatever's underneath the stripes was redone as well? I didn't give you permission for that...

In all honesty, Burnt, the everything blue thing you got going on here is throwing off the color a tad too much. Can you dull it down a bit, or change the highlights to a more white color? 22:39, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Idk.... For me, texture and shading are the same? If there wasn't light difference, fur darkness wouldn't show up... I could revert it though, do you want me to do that? 00:07, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

If you could? If you want to redo the shading itself, that's more than fine, since that's what you asked me if you could do. But I always thought the texture was different...unless your texture is built into your shading layers??? which if that's the case, then it's fine.

I usually mix up shading layers and texture, since I deemed that they were the same thing... So do I revert it? 04:16, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Preferably, yes. 04:52, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think she is able revert it back tbh. 05:18, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Tom (ES) (KP) ~ Redone


You forgot the nicked ear. Nice job, BTW. 23:01, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded thank u, also forgot to crop bc im a gotdamn idiot 00:04, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the transition of dark and light on the haunch? 04:22, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:21, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Foxleap (W Alt 2) - Redone
How do I tabby 00:36, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur or smudge the stripes some more? They look a bit too uniform 00:55, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 00:59, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur them more please 06:04, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 15:34, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) - Tweaked
lightened. oa was insane and duck, and i tweaked it. 04:53, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the paw light? 15:45, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 16:13, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten her some more. It's literally nearly white, a bit above silver. I compared the apprentice and the elder, and mine was a good amount lighter 02:17, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Snow, this is the same color code that Cloudy gave me... 02:21, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe it's my computer again, but mine seems alot lighter for some reason... Shouldn't you match mine anyway? Mine was approved first, unless I'm completely missing Skye's charart 02:26, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Icy already said it's the same colour and shade. They look matched to me, so it must be your monitor. 02:28, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

It probably is, because I'm using a crappy tv as my monitor lol (a small one). Anywho, can you brighten the earpink just a tiny bit? 02:41, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 02:46, October 11, 2015 (UTC)