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Berrynose(KI)-For Approval


This is my 2nd Kit.It was gathering dust in my files,and finally we are allowed to do non-current ranks.I know im the 2nd image over the limit,but I think there 4 images ready to be approved.Critque?Comments?questions?help? FirePelt  22:32, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

blur shading and your NOT over page limit very good!--Echopaw 01:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.thank you echopaw!I blurred the shading more.Anything else?And Echopaw,Please sign with 4 tidles(~). FirePelt  16:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Nothing it's purrfect firepelt lets let sandy look at it!Echopaw 16:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment.I can't wait for bramble or sandy to look at it.I am quite proud of myself.This took a while to make.I did my best!^.^. FirePelt  17:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Looks like your opinion is high value, Sand. ;) The ear pink needs to be darker and more visible, Fire. Other than that, the image looks great. -- Bramble -sama  17:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

lol, no idea why =/ Anyways (see my Americanism there?), all I see, besides Bramble's mention above, is that the eyes ook very red. A paler, more yellowish amber may be better as the kits' eyes are too small to make orange visible properly. Sa nd  y!  17:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on this soon. FirePelt  18:08, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Thank you for the compliment Bramble!^.^ FirePelt '''Hows the prey running? 00:36, January 1, 2010 (UTC)'''

I think this looks good =) Comments before approval? Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  23:43, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I absolutely positively HATE to point this out, but Berrynose's warrior image is long haired. Shouldn't this one be long haired too? --Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I agree and also the color isn't quite right. -- Ashshadow Rawr :3 21:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

So what your saying is,I have to REMAKE THE WHOLE THING??!! FirePelt '''DONT mess with me. 03:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

No, you don't. I can easily layer a longhaired blank over the image and fix it with minor changes to the original picture, and then all you'd have to do is run the burn tool (set on Highlights) over it a few times to make it look like the warrior version. -- Bramble -sama  04:27, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

omg.Thank you bramble!Your a big help!I'll run the burn tool over him.thank you again! FirePelt '''DONT mess with me. 16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded.I did the best i could to fix it.How's it look? FirePelt '''DONT mess with me. 16:21, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Yep, that's much better. I'm sorry I scared you for a minute Fire! Okay, I'd blur the shading just a tinsy bit more. Good job!--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 17:37, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lol.It's okay night.I'll fix the shading. FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 17:44, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 17:47, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Blur the neck shading. Happy New Year! 18:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.Anything else? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 23:26, January 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

The eye color still isn't quite right. Make it more of an orangy color, like his warrior image---Berrynose --Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 05:16, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm doing the best I can with the color,but it's getting harder to change it. FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 15:08, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

I'm sorry Fire, I didn't mean to upset you! I'm just trying to go for consistency.--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:23, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

You did'nt upset me!XD.It's just it's getting harder to change the color and blend the new color in with thie shading,cause the new color is darker than the shading.I can't change it now without re-doing it. FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 20:06, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

Oh no, I didn't mean the pelt color, I meant the eye color--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:12, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh!I'm a mousebrain!I did'nt read the eye color I though it was pelt color! FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 20:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 20:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)'''

Yeah, the eye color is much better! I'd blur the shading more though.--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Dull the color a bit, it's too bright. Look at his warrior image.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:06, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having a really hard time with the color,but I just need to find the right tool for the job.Which tool do I use? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 21:45, January 5, 2010 (UTC)'''

Use the sponge tool and set it to desaturate.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Thank you mouse!Anything else? FirePelt '''How's the prey running? 20:12, January 6, 2010 (UTC)'''

I think you shouls redo the shading. He looks kind of sunken in.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 22:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Can anyone help me a bit with the shading if it's worse? FirePelt '''RAWRZ!!!! 21:50, January 7, 2010 (UTC)'''

Blur the shading under the chin some more. And on second thought, I liked the image you had of him before you changed it.ChelseaFC 23:03, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED.Anything else at at all? ☆ ★Fire★☆  X 23:41, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

the eyes look a little funny...-- QuailflightTheAVATAR! Give me a mouse. NOW!09:40, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

No, the eyes look fine. But maybe lighten the ear pink more? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 18:42, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Done! ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ  Have a happy Valentineღ 22 21:15, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I know you're probably tired of hearing this, but blur the chin shading as much as you possibly can. It looks like a line. But other than that, this looks awsome! Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:05, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Thx for the comment Night! ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ  Have a happy Valentineღ 22 17:03, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  22:05, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy,Im half dead right now,whats CBA stand for? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ  Have a happy Valentineღ 22 22:08, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, it stands for Comments Before Approval :) Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:13, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you Night =) I'm too lazy (and bored of it) to type the whole thing... guess I should. Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  22:16, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

lol.I can tell.Told you im half dead! XD '''  ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ    Have a happy Valentineღ |undefined 22 22:17, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lol. A. :) -- Bramble -sama  16:17, January 18, 2010 (UTC)