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Bluestar (Alt. Ki2)- For Approval


In the allegiances for Bluestar's Prophecy, she was described as a gray she-cat with blue eyes, and, in case you couldn't tell by my username, she's my favorite character, so I snatched her up as soon as I found out she would get one for that. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad. Brighten the ear-pink and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the left ear's earpink. 00:14 Fri Dec 2

Cute! Define the shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:53, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 02:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the --> (right) side of her. 23:54, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the shading on the paws. 19:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks as if it's not in the right place on ---> this side. 21:21 Sat Dec 3

And center this ---> ear pink. And blur <--- this sides earpink a bit. 22:50 Sat Dec 3

This looks the color of her pale alt, which is still kinda blue-gray, maybe color pick from her gray leader alt? It'd look more gray probably. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 21:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen and center the ear pink. Darken and blur the shading, it looks like you have none. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is gray and define the shading. 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the gray lineart, defined the shading, and got rid of some waste i found; changes not showing. Bluestar11796 17:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found some more waste, and changes are still not showing. Bluestar11796 17:53, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading on the <-- 21:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the right ear pink. 21:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is off, I belive. If not, lighten the shading on <--- that side and blur it so it looks a little bit better. 23:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

As said above and blur the shading too 23:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color different from the pelt color, as it looks the same. 05:34, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

As said already BLUR THE SHADING TOOOOONS! Also the shading placement is off it should be on the neck and on the legs too. 14:36, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looks blotchy, but I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 16:11, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are white streaks on her face and chest. Make those gray. 16:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a bit, and blur the highlights (if any) and shading to make them blend more together. 22:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC). The whole pelt color looks blotchy and uneven, smooth it out 23:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 00:07, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can. Smooth it out. 01:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's possible to blur it. If you're using pixlr, change to something else. I know pixlr only allows you to blur so much. 03:23, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

I do use pixlr at school, but I can't use gimp right now 'cause I'm at school right now, and I can't download anything on the school computers. Bluestar11796 17:52, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Gaussian blur on pixlr. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:51, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpinks. 21:49 Thu Dec 8

Are you still working on this? 20:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 01:08, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It hasn't been seven days yet. 01:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. And sorry for the delay; my computers at home are crashing, so I haven't been able to get on, but I remembered that my school has photoshop, so, yeah. Bluestar11796 17:43, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the shading placement, then blur a LOT. Do you use layers? Brightstripes 16:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I just started using layers, but it's kinda hard with photoshop, because you can't change the background, and that's all I can use right now. I'll try, though. Bluestar11796 18:56, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading darker and you're good to go. 00:18, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think the changes are showing. Bluestar11796 14:32, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's a ton of blurred lineart on both sides. 00:19, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading a ton, define the earpink, and make the eyes less neon.

Reuploaded I basicly redid the whole image, cause I don't know how to fix blurred lineart, and who did the comment above mine? You forgot to sign. And I'll leave the eye color the way it is because she has peircing, ice-blue eyes unless more people agree with you. Changes not showing. Bluestar11796 16:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. 21:27, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the color match her leader image, right now it looks to dark/gray. 22:21, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Seedkit (Ki) - For Approval
Oi...I must really like kits. :P Comments~? 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Redden the ear-pink and define it in her ginger ear. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:23, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks. 19:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Beautiful Twi! Blur the places where the patches are smudged, they're too sharp. 19:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, I see waste. I'll kill it~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Killed the evil waste~! >:) 19:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! *noms* Define the shading. :3 (probably more evil waste for you to kill) 19:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate the evil waste. :P 22:09, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink the slightest bit. Make the ear pink on ---> that side a little bit smaller to make the other one. 23:14, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine to me. 01:43, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

What to change and what not to change? 02:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to change the earpink, it's fine, however could you define the shading a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - But of course. :3 21:44, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawn to reserve another charart 00:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

If this is withdrawn may I do it? 00:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may. Go reserve it 00:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the confusion, I thought we were doing apprentice images. Is it okay if I still work on it, or no? 00:40, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so back to for approval. I will bw working on this so it might take a day or two because I am going to be doing it on GIMP. Thanx for your patience. 21:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. I just can't work with this...Gimp shows the lineart blurred and all and I couldn't work with this. I'm sorry. 15:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Since this is withdrawn (again), may I do it? Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  15:47, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to ask, just go for it ;3 18:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading was to light in my opinion, so I darkened it and I found more evil waste to kill! Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  19:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! SO pretty, Make the earpinks the same size. 19:48 Sun Dec 11

Reuploded Purplemoon   We wish you a Perry Christmas...  19:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'd lighten the whole image because it looks too dark. Also, blur the neck shading as it looks to hard edge. 20:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon  Three Advent candles lighted  20:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image a bit more. 06:58 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded Purplemoon  Three Advent candles lighted  12:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Crop the image to get rid of the extra space and lighten the white. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It was hard to lighten the white... Purplemoon Three Advent candles lighted  21:56, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

The white still needs to be whiter. 00:16, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Horrible. Comments? 02:00, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading, define the haunch highlight and the one on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and brighten it. 02:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I just noticed I uploaded on meh B-Day ^^ 02:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Either darken the head shading or lighten the "highlights". 02:27 Thu Dec 8

This doesn't look very tawny... Maybe take the color from Birchfall's alt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the color from the ear pink chart, I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else has an opinion. 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. Also, Take the colors from Oakheart's alt warrior, if you're looking for tawny. This doesn't look...tawny...if you ask me. If it is, it's pale and should be darkened. 03:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did Okay I darkened it because it is tawny I took it from the ear pink chart. I would have used gausion blur, but I don't really know how to use it :P 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better, actually. Now, define the ear pink. I don't care if it's from the chart or not. I can't see it. 03:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading quite a bit. Also, just cause the color (pelt OR earpink) is from the chart, doesn't always make it right. Sometimes the colors just need to be tweaked to fit certain images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading (sorry I don't mean to repeat things) and make the earpink darker. 16:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna be the death of me 18:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more. 13:10, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it worse. 02:27, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be darkened more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more umm pink and not peach. xD This looks great! 00:19, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @ Cinder I don't know waht you mean so I just darkened the ear pink. Changes not showing. 21:43, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading; it's a bit flat. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I meant that you should make the earpink pink-ish because right now it looks peach.. 21:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Molepaw (OTS) (A) -CBA
I don't like the shading, but I didn't know the placement. And I got the earpink and nose from the kit...it looks a little neon, but that's my opinion. Comments? 02:22, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eyes and the shading :) And also, perhaps blur the connection between the cream and pelt color on the tell a tad? 02:23, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to email you the shading placement? I made one for my friend, I'll share =) 02:27, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patches look a tad red... Make them a bit more brown and lighten/make the ear-pink a tad less neon. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be great, Ivy. I'll work on the rest after my shower. 02:30, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the cream a ton. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:48, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^_^ 03:26, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Here are two versions of how you could do the shading ^^ Smudge the earpink into the ear. 03:42 Thu Dec 8

The cream looks greenish, unless I need to get mai eyes checked. =3 04:33, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look greenish. Please lighten the nose pink. 16:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it after teh funeral. :3 20:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, it looks greenish to me too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Really...? I don't see it, though it may be my computer... I color picked straight from the kit image... 05:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

If you did that and are having trouble with the color, why not just color pick off his father, Berrynose? :3  16:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur/smudge a bit more where his cream meets his brown? 16:09, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded - ^^ 17:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 01:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt CBA, but the colours don't match the kit image, and the shading doesn't make sense to me. Try to match the colours better and if you're having troubles with shading placement, look at one of these examples. 06:28 Mon Dec 12

If nobody minds, I'm asking for a colour sample for the cream. I just can't figure it out. :3 22:23, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

You could save the kit file to your computer and colour pick off that. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 21:23, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

I did that, but it was either too light/green-ish, too dark, or as said above, don't match the kit image. 21:47, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

The colours are perfect. If they dont match the kit should be tweaked. CBA? 20:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (A) - For Approval


Okay, so, she's in 'Chararts needing images' Under Thunderclan. For a Apprentice...wwhy, i don't know, i think it should've been in Shadowclan but okayyy. Anyway here she is! I didnt know if i shouldv'e torn her ears and give her scars or not, so i didn't and i took ALL chararts from her mc image. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The Warriors App said her apprentice name was Yellowpaw. =P Blur the shading. 03:01, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Could you make the fur spikes more consitant with the other images please? 03:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the snout needs to be shortened. 03:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the part not in shadow on her tail longer and run the length of her tail. Smudge the pelt color into the ear. Give her a light part on the dip in her back as the light would hit her there. 03:07, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and she needs a dark gray/black nose 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. <span style="">03:42 Fri Dec 9

Blur the highlights. (If you used them) -- 13:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ruffles in the fur a bit larger and sharper like her other chararts, also make the muzzle a bit shorter. - Scarletwind    ✧ L i s a n n a<span style="color: #592e81">✧          23:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the ear-pink more please. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

Okay, give me a few, i have to get my S.S. HW done, how do i make her ruffles sharper? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:46, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and smudge the earpink into the ear. Curve the line of the jaw more. <span style="">22:44 Sat Dec 10

Blend the highlight/shading on the tail into the pelt. 18:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:49, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you feel comfortable with it, I think the image would benefit from teh eyes being rounded slightly. 03:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

How would I do that? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:29, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 15:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading/highlights are blotchy. Can you blur them? Also tone down the highlights (or darken the base coat if you're not using them) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  16:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened her base coat(Didn;t want to use Highlights on tis one....) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:26, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's a white pixel in the ruffled fur on her shoulder. 22:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I have like NO idea how that got there....O.o Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to contradict myself, but lighten the whole thing to match the MC image. Also, the shading doesn't make sense, look at the apprentice tutorial for how it's supposed to look. Blur it a ton and blur the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * laughs* *roll eyes* Make up your mind, why don't you? Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 01:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-That had better been worth the headache. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Headache.....So, oh teh chat, Paleclaw told me to lighten her a touch, and to blur her shading. So i did....Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. 20:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be all one colour. 20:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the pelt into the earpink. 20:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I GOT VOLECLAW :D I copied all of the shading and colors from his warrior so dont be slapping me 4 that :P 13:45, December 8, 2011 (UTC) (im going to eventually set up my sig on here :P )

Blur the shading a lot and try to make it look like it's coming from one light source. Nice job, though. ^^ 14:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge where the earpink meets the gray, and the two paws farthest from us should be darker to match with the shading. 14:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLAODED, changes aren't showing :| 14:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement more like the one in the tutorial. The shading doesn't make sense right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye and smudge the pelt color into the earpink so he looks floofeh =3 18:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

And add a white pixel to the eye if it's not already there. *can't see it* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

He seems darker than his other images, or is it just my bad eyes? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 00:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading on the tail or darken the shading on the belly and legs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. I can see the layers in which they get stronger. 20:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Bluefeathers friend here, she said she'd reupload it tomorrow. 14:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think I will re-do this tomorrow as I cannot stand how this is. And I can't really fix the shading placement because for some reason, on Pixlr, every time I use gaussian blur on it, it changes the placement :\ 00:39, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you need any help, if the shading isn't going right, I could help you. <span style="">01:47 Tue Dec 13

REUPLOADED Mrrrrrrrrrooooooowwwwwwwww :P 12:23, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

THIS IS BOOTIFUL BLUEFEATHER! No comments from me :) Grayflower10 16:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Don't leave a comment just for complimenting the image unless there haven't been any comments for a couple days, please, Grayflower. Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the ears a bunch. The shading still doesn't make a lot of sense. You also need to fix your signature, Bluefeather. <span style="">19:53 Tue Dec 13

Ok, first of all, i've been having SO MUCH TROUBLE WITH SMUDGING. This entire time it's been for approval i've been trying to smudge it in but it just won't. I did the shading exactly like the apprentice tutorial....and I honestly don't think that the shading needs blurred. Not trying to say that I won't blur it but I just don't see why it needs blurred. And Sweetflower is making me a sig so it'll be fixed soon :) 20:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay well I can't see any lack of shading on the shoulder ("highlights", if you will) and it doesn't make much sense. It'll look a lot better if you add some "highlight" (just erase the shading) on the shoulder and then blur it manually if you use Gaussian blur. <span style="">01:29 Wed Dec 14

Are you still working on this, Bluefeather? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, yes I am. I just used dodge on it if that's alright.. 18:42, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it a ton, if you look at this charart and the warrior image close to each other, the warrior is much lighter. Hmmm..lighten the shading? 20:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink into the pelt to make it look natural. 21:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
I am very proud of this <3. :3. Comments? Elorisa  01:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

You should be. :) There is waste around the charart, and blur the tail shading. 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Would this get a charart? All we know is that he's a "dark tom", and we can't just copy the grayscale from a comic... 04:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteclaw got one and he was also mentioned as a dark tom. I think he should. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Just...dust and echoes 07:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He does appear to be almost black in the image he is shown in; I'll tweak him a tad, but I think he should get one :3. Elorisa  13:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I concede that. Go nuts. 14:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

I can see waste between the whiskers and possibly under the chin area. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 07:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. 19:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ -- Elorisa   21:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">22:40 Sat Dec 10

Blur the highlight(?) on the back leg. <span style="">11:55 Tue Dec 13

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, it just loks blurred. <span style="">00:02 Thu Dec 15

Are you still working on this, Risa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you are, the tiny glimmer in the --> eye is too...wide. Long. I don't know, too --->this way. 20:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar(A) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Not my best. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think he should be short haired. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make him match the leader image. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur his markings more and define the shading. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 02:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I made him short-haired and I'll do everything else in the morning. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. RE-UPLOADED. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match the leader better. <span style="">00:55 Sat Dec 10

And blur where the belly meets the ginger. 02:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna withdraw this. I'm not quite ready for Firestar yet. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I'll reuploaded this ASAP. 17:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Sandstorm. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  17:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay I re-did the stripes the best I could and I also tweaked a few other things. 17:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the stripes, belly, and earpink, and make the stripes match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded okay I color picked off of his leader image and I did my very best with the stripes. 18:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the belly to the pelt. 18:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded I smudged it a touch too. Changes not showing. 18:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

You probably took the colors from the shaded part of the image, cause the stripes are still too dark. Lighten them. And they don't really match the leader image still.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the non-shaded part of the image. Okay, I looked at the Firestar leader image and I mached it to the best of my ability okay? It matches it the way I see it. 18:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the stripes sharper at the ends. 19:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pale belly come to a point instead of being round at the top  19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry, but it doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">23:06 Sat Dec 10

Add shading and highlights. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, she just has to add shading. She can add highlights if she wants to, but it's not necessary. 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sorry.

Reuploaded Okay Ivystripe gave me a redline. Better? 18:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, Firestar ;3 And yes, Better Sandstorm. Define the shading even more and blur together the markings. 18:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Give all of the credit to Ivystripe. 19:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading more and the stripes still need to be lightened a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stripes fail :P 01:29, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to make it look like the other images and blur the shading so that it blends more into the unshaded parts. 01:34, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Those are the right amount of stripes. I should know since I did all but his leader image (if I had done the leader I would have done the stripes differently) 01:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you for referencing Ivystripe 02:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Alright. Blur the lighter part of his fur a bit more. 02:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 23:37, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Umm nobody's commented in three days... bad? 21:45, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Defione the stripes, blur and darken the shading, and smudge the ear pink into the pelt. 00:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

All right, this definitely isn't enough stripes... Also, the stripe closest to his back leg shouldn't be curved. 00:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay ivystripe gave me that redline so.. Take it up with her >_>;; I'll reupload this tomorrow anyway. 03:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ For Approval
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. <span style="">07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 00:22, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And smooth the shading too. It is blotchy in some places. <span style="">05:47, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Make the color match the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and tone down the highlights if you use them. Breeze whisker  21:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Starforce? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (A) ~ For Approval
I quite like Willowpelt :) 15:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but thicken the shading until it matches the warrior image. 15:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 15:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing 15:36, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge the ear pink. 23:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, sigh...darn blur tool :\ every time I don't use layers my chararts stink, but every time I do use layers with this blank it changes the placement! Raaaawrrrrr 00:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I decided to completely redo it, please don't tell me to lighten it because Pixlr's being annoying :\ I'll try if you ask but no promises I can completely fix it... 12:35, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her a lot and try and make the shading like on of the ones in the Apprentice Tutorial. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink please. <span style="">01:33 Wed Dec 14

Are you still working on this, Bluefeather? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this, I have better chararts already made that i'd like to do instead of this soooo yeah. 18:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone who wants it can take over. Ill archive it in 24 hours. 20:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I need something to do. XD 20:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took all colors from her warrior image. Comments? 20:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Dovewing (A) ~ For Approval
Not sure i like this... 15:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make her lighter. Take the colors right from her warrior image. 15:26, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I did take the colors straight from her but gaussian blur broke her :( So I simply had to dodge it. REUPLOADED, changes aren't showing, I think :P 15:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink please. Also correct me if I'm worng but the shading looks like it's in the wrong places, kind of like just a big streak going across her body. Look at the shading placement in the apprentice tutorials if you need help. <span style="">22:43, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Yes it is wrong. There needs to be shading onher back hanch and across her spine should be shading not highlights. Just making things specific :3 <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest taking a look here for where the shading goes. <span style="">23:35 Fri Dec 9

The eyes don't look pale golden to me...did you take that from her warrior? Make sure you add depth to her eyes as well  20:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes as well. 20:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't the eye style artists choice? 02:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Eye style is but shading an eye isn't style. Without shading it just looks flat and that's not realistic. 04:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Message from Loudy(I'm Loudy's real life friend): I'll reupload it as soon as possible.

Ah, okay. Sorry for the mishap. (and sorry that I am posting nonsense comments right now xD)  20:20, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">12:07 Tue Dec 13

Um....Blue here, Loudy needed me to get on her computer and upload this because she has a softball tournament today. 12:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Either the base pelt or shading needs to be lightened, me thinks. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 03:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:24, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, 5 words: I. Hate. The. Blur. Tool. 17:10, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the charart; Dovewing is a pale gray cat - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">00:21 Fri Dec 16

The shading doesn't really make sense right now. Try looking at the apprentice tutorial for a redline of how it's supposed to go. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:53, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a tad. 20:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (A) - For Approval
Ta-da! I'm extremely proud of this. Comments? 21:10, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink to give it a more realistic look. This is really good, Blossom! 21:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Can you make the black spot on the haunch just a tad bit bigger to match the warrior image? 21:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! Could you make the earpink a little less purple? If you got it from the warrior image, then nevermind. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. (Lovely Blossom!) <span style="">00:43 Sat Dec 10

Her nose should be dark grey. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 09:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, everyone. :3 -- 13:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading even more please  00:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Blossomtear? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt A.) ~ For Approval
Brackenfur was described as a ginger tom in Fire and Ice when he was an apprentice. Took the ear color for his warrior image. Comments? 21:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Realized I used the female lineart xD Removed the eyelash thing, but the changes aren't showing. 21:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little (as in color-wise) and blur the edges of them some more 21:40, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:54, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The back leg looks highlighted instead of shaded. I don't know if it was intentially but I'm just pointing it out. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for what the shading should look like, and saturate the image a bunch. <span style="">01:05 Sat Dec 10

I used the shading placement guide wildheart. The gaussian blur just made it look weird. 02:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the shading a tad and saturated the image. 12:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad more. 20:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes a tad. 02:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:17, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make him a bit redder? A bit more like Firestar. He looks golder-brown right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ For Approval
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? <span style="">23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. <span style="">00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. <span style="">00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) <span style="">23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. <span style="">21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD <span style="">00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Doesn't everyone? ;) <span style="">23:22 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading and the highlights. 01:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and no offence, but the shading is blurred enough and to the max. <span style="">11:08 Thu Dec 15

Darken the shading, on the rump especially. And have you tried Gaussian blurring it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (A) - For Approval
I think I can do this. Alright, I'm really proud of this charart. Please do tell me if something is wrong with it. I adore Whitestorm, so I like that I can do his apprentice charart. <span style="">22:33, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

There seems to be some white pixels in his ears. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC) Also make his ears feathered like his deputy image. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:42, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if the ear's should be like the deputy charart because he is older then and has been in more battles, and it's not like that in the warrior image. The white pixels on the ear is the smudged pelt color into the earpink, unless you want me to change that. <span style="">22:53, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

That would probably work if the earpink had white all around it and you're right if the warrior charart doen't have it then the apprentice charart doesn't need it. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I see what you mean now by the white pixels. <span style="">22:59, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Darn, I was hoping to get this after Badgerpaw was done. XD Anyways we he actually got the scar as an apprentice, but since we don't know at what point, and you can't see the back of the ear anyways, I'd say forget about it. Can you darken the shading. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have tufted ears, too? Bluestar11796 23:20, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't mention what was already said, Bluestar. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  23:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Mmmm xD. Okay, but you can't really see the scar on the warrior image anyway. <span style="">00:03, Sat, Dec, 10, 2011

Define the shading. <span style="">00:11 Sat Dec 10

Don't berate Bluestar for stating what needed to be done, Firestar. It hadn't been mentioned before. She's right: this does need tufted ears. Blur and darken the shading a bit. Lovely job, apprentice ;) <span style="">01:11 Sat Dec 10

I already said it needed feathered ears. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

But then DJ said something about it not needing them, and it wasn't fixed on the next upload. Bluestar has every right to say that. Don't get bossy, apprentice. She was only making a point, and a good one at that. The warrior charart probably wasn't tweaked yet, and that's why it doesn't have the ears. 06:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, just so lightly! <span style="">13:32 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded -  Fail on the tufts. <span style="">06:59, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Make the tufts taller and not contain earpink. Right now his ears look torn in three pieces. Just add it on top of the lineart  18:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you're having trouble, just copy Iceheart's lineart on Redtail. <span style="">06:23 Mon Dec 12

Darken the tail shading. <span style="">00:07 Thu Dec 15

Reuploaded -  <3 this charart. <span style="">05:39, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

It seems like the earpink's two different colors. Fix that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Better like this? <span style="">05:45, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Crowfeather (A) -CBA
Crowfeather. *squee* I luff him so much, so I had to make him look as good as I possibally could at midnight. All colors stolen from his warrior image, except for the nose color, which came from his kit image. Comments? 05:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! =3 Define the shading. 07:28, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the shading a bit more if possible. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  17:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:59, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the pelt is too blurred into the ear-pink. Make the ear-pink bigger where the pelt is blurred into it. <span style="">00:04 Sun Dec 11

reuplaoded 16:54, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail bases' shading. <span style="">02:16 Wed Dec 14

Lighten the base colour; I can barely see the lineart. Are you still working on this? 02:24, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. The computer that it was saved on just got fixed, so I've been a little inactive with my chararts, but I'll work on it. :3 02:29, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - How's it now? :3 03:13, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 20:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MCA) ~ For Approval
First tortie, comments? 01:14, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">01:29 Sun Dec 11

Also, smudge it into the earpink. 01:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add dapples. Pretty. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the nose. xD 02:01, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fail with the dapples. -- 02:08, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the belly's shading a tad. 12:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image, there are dapples. Fail. Dx 17:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink a wee bit. *steals* <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 22:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the tail stripes. Good job. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (A) ~ CBA
I just realized I forgot the earpink... Derp. I'll fix that. Comments? 16:38, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the nose and lighten the chest and belly shading a tad. 18:16, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 'I did ''fill in the nose, it's a darker shade of gray than the patches. 20:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. <span style="">02:20 Tue Dec 13

Reuploaded. 01:01, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are still a little bright. 01:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:49, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

The're still a little too bright. <span style="">00:05 Fri Dec 16

Reuploaded. No more comments having to do with the highlights. I just took them off. :3 00:29, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eyes a bit and I'll CBA. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. =3 01:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Helpin' Paley out here, CBA? 18:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry to interrupt, but, you smudged some of the earpink out of the ear. The one closest to us on our right. :3 21:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oops. xD 22:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Gonna continue the CBA since it was minor  22:51, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MCA) ~ For Approval
I took all of the colors (except the nose X3) from her mc. I kinda like it. Comments? 16:45, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The broken paw should curl a little bit more, like in her other images. And make the nose dark grey. 16:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define ear-pink on →→ this ear ,16:57,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the nose, ear, and foot :). 17:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Poor Cinderpelt. Blur the shading to make it blend in more with either the highlights or the unshaded parts. Nice job with the lineart! 18:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you. I think this is a blurred as I can get it. :) 19:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her ankle joint looks swollen. make that part a little smaller.I know it's supposed to be twisted but it just looks kind of awkward right now 20:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the ankle thinner and changed a little of the lineart on the leg. 21:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the toes less long and make the paw a bit smaller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:43, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Wow this is taking longer than Lionheart. Fixed the paw. O.o 14:53, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink on her right side. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 03:40, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Made earpink lighter. 04:16, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The broken leg still looks a little swollen. Thin it out a little bit more. 20:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (A) - For Approval
Hmm, I must practice shadings more ,16:51,December 11,2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. Just make the nose pink, since white cats have pink noses. 16:57, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I like the shading, too. Cute! And, the deputy version has green eyes. :3 16:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its not green, but blue (Im going to tweak it and pre-made him). And I dont like white cats with blue eyes... Reuploaded ,17:00,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. =3 My bad. My eyes are obviously not very good. Blur the earpink. 17:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its ok, that eye is really small xD Reuploaded ,17:07,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Make the nose more pink. 19:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,20:30,December 11,2011 (UTC)

His eye colour should match the original image. Change it to blue. 02:15, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

NO ONE understands me there ,20:59,December 14,2011 (UTC)

I get what you mean Leaf, but just cause you're gonna tweak the deputy image, doesn't mean you should change the color of all of the eyes. There was nothing wrong with it before. But since you fixed them, CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:46, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt but I think the shading should be blurred/lightened more. <span style="">05:49, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

lightened? are you joking? I barely see tem on my PC ,21:06,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Perhaps blur then. <span style="">22:30, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Mudfur (MCA) - For Approval
I'm EXTREMELY proud of this one. Comments? 17:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! Can you define a pale underbelly a tad please?*like it!* ,17:19,December 11,2011 (UTC)

And add the pale belly to his belly, like between the haunch and foreleg. :3 17:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a smidge. <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste all around it. 00:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I too see the waste. Dull the ear pink a touch and the herbs look like it's all...different colors. I know I'm being blunt, but it just looks unatural and odd. 02:13, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, its the same color as the one on the medicine cat image. And the herbs can be any color, I think. (has the same herbs on his medicine cat image, too) 02:33, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

You matched his MC wonderfully, Snow. Define the shading just a tad though. 15:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink into the ear some more? ^^ . 22:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:14, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source on his shoulder and don't have the back of his hindpaw that is furthest from us have a light part on the back of it. 00:54, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. <span style="">23:14 Thu Dec 15

Are you still working on this? 18:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
Yay! My first charart I like it! =) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 17:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and stripes. 17:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, rename this Owlwhisker.apprentice.png and smudge the earpink. 17:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency ,17:32,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading for you. Add more shading too, and make the stripes a tad bigger to match the other image. 17:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Ivy, i wanted to do it xD Yes Acorn, also add more stripes and made them more real, i never seen before a cat with such less stripes. Warrior version is going do be tweaked, i think :-) ,17:37,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you Ivy. Geez I've drawn a blank how do you add transparency? Changes aren't showing. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 17:59, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you're using GIMP, select the white areas, then go to edit---> clear. If it doesn't become transparent then go to Layers--->Transparency--->add alpha channel 18:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken stripes and add more lighter of them and made M stripe on the head. ,18:12,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Can someone blur the shading for me? GIMP isn't working at the moment. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstorm can you make the transparency for me? Its not working for me. =/ Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 21:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added light highlights, does it look okay? Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 23:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

i make it transparent when you get CBA it, darken the shadings more ,16:12,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Unfortunately, we can't CBA if it's not transparent. But don't worry, I've done it for you :) Blur the shading/highlights. 00:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys I've been really busy I got my own computer today so I'll get right on it. :) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 02:09, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay now how does it look? =) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan!  22:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Yeah, it's not that great, I know. Let me know right away if there's something up with it. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 17:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I removed the thumbnail for you. Redden the earpink, and define the shading. 17:32, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

She needs to have a gray/black nose. Maybe take the earpink from her kittypet charart. 17:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, smudge the earpink. 17:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-name this Birdpaw.apprentice.png. 17:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency ,17:36,December 11,2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The stupid blur tool is being a butt.could someone help me? And I don't know how to add transperency. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I made it transparent ,18:08,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Ty. I just noticed, does she need a scar? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 18:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm guessing that she should have two apprentice images, one with it and one without. 19:14, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Would that mean that she needs an alt for that, like Brightheart with her injuries? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No she just gets one with a scar. Add the scar. 19:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added the scar. Looks good? Also, the blur tool hates me D;. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

My eyes are betraying me today (Leafstorm XD) but is there shading on this image? 20:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">20:35 Sun Dec 11

Make the scar a little.. thinner. It looks fat right now. Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Three Advent candles lighted  20:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency again. 21:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the scar. Yes there's shading. No, it's not blurred. My blur tool won'te blur it. And Idk how to do transperency, first i've heard of it. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 01:09, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Transparency is where you get rid of the white background. And define the shading. (or darken it)  01:41, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as though there's alot of extra space. Crop it. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 20:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Birdpaw.apprentice.png. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink. <span style="">02:37 Tue Dec 13

Lighten the base colour, then darken the shading. I can barely even see the lineart. 00:28, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Rubblepaw (A) ~ For Approval
So here he is. Rubblepaw. I rather like this one....so comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The eye closest to us looks kind of reddish. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you. Blur the highlights so it blends in with the shading. 22:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fire, i made his eyes amber, they are the same color; however, i'll try to fi it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops haha NOW I fixed the title XD sorry! 22:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * Edit Conflict xD* Reuploaded-Better? Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

That's not amber, it's orange. Make it more yellowy. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:57, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I figured his eyes were described as amber, but he doesn't have an eye color, so you can keep it orange. :P Blur the shading/highlights though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:58, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the eyes nevertheless xD. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, will do. xD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:39, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink more, there's this random ear-pink edge on > this end. Can you erase the ear-pink there and make it part of the pelt? <span style="">00:33 Tue Dec 13

That's how its supposed to be..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

No, Sweet's right. It's too far into the pelt. <span style="">01:16 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights (?) are blotchy. Smooth them out. <span style="">11:50 Thu Dec 15

How were they blotchy? I was sure I blurred it into oblivion! I don't get that. but, anyways, Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:32, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gray meets the ear pink. 22:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

They are. It looks like a splotch, with the colours around it going darker. Blur them more please. <span style="">22:27 Thu Dec 15

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the ear pink and the "highlights" look blotchy. The shading placement looks sort of odd, and blur it. 22:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, can you smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, it looks like it was blurred and not smudged. <span style="">23:05 Thu Dec 15

On the behalf of Sandstorm, I'll explain how to fix the highlights, since she did not. Blur and smooth them together into the pelt. 18:27, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Runningbrook (A) - For Approval
Well, I tried ,16:46,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Darken the shading a tad. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the shading on the back of the back xD <span style="">23:37 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded,18:51,December 13,2011 (UTC)

The paws are darken than everything else, wither make the shading darker everywhere but the paws, or make the paws lighter please. <span style="">02:11 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading a touch. <span style="">05:59, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Reuploaded,21:01,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (A) ~ For approval
Got all colors from original image. CommentS? 23:15, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">23:20 Mon Dec 12

Re-Uploaded. 23:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and darken it. <span style="">01:09 Wed Dec 14

Re-Uploaded. 01:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlights. <span style="">23:58 Wed Dec 14

I can't; then it won't show. It looks fine as it is. 22:51, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the tail shading and blur the haunch shading? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind leg. 20:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">07:30, Tue, Dec, 13, 2011

I love this! Make the stripes wavy like his warrior image. <span style="">11:48 Tue Dec 13

It's a bit darker than his other images. Could you lighten it up a bit? 14:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. <span style="">08:01, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

Make the stripes a bit thinner on the head and body but not the tail or ankles. Those look perfect. Also give his highlights a tiny bit of a golden-yellow tint like his warrior. Great job! 15:32, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes don't go solidly over curves like shoulders like that. It should break where his elbow starts, not go right over the lineart like it's not there. 02:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Fail. <span style="">06:27, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Blur the stripes a little. 01:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make the stripes a bit wavier. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I don't know how much wavier the stripes can get without destroying the whole image. <span style="">09:16, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Tigerheart (Alt. A) - For Approval
As stated in Long Shadows, Tigerpaw compared his golden pelt to Lionblaze's. But this is messy...not the best I could've done. (Sorry, the first one I uploaded was using my friend's account that she left logged in) 08:32, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, sorry. Declined for now, but you can repost when there's space. When you do rpost, make it match the warrior alt. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'll remove the decline. ;) I just cleaned up the CBAs. 14:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redden/pinkin the earpink, tone down and smooth out the highlights, darken the eyes to pick outf from the pelt, color in the nose and darken the shading ;3 20:45, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

He looks yellow, and his stripes look almost green, maybe take the colors from Lionblaze, or Lionheart? Or from his alt Warrior. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah this needs to match his warrior alt. <span style="">23:22 Tue Dec 13

No, Wild they don't. The artist can do it however they want. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:51, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Maple, if he was described the wrong pelt color exactly the same twice, then yes, they must match. 00:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink. <span style="">01:15 Wed Dec 14

Yeah he looks yellowish and smudge/blur the stripes 03:46, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Don't let the highlights get the better of the pelt color if that makes sence. <span style="">08:06, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

I think what DJ means is to dull the highlights and blend them with the pelt more. 20:19, December 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Yes Shadey, thats what I ment, and perhaps redo the stripes on the highlights if needed. <span style="">06:13, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Also make the background transperant. <span style="">06:30, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Still working on this Dazzle? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Quickpaw (A) ~CBA
I really like how he came out. :3 Comments? 14:57, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is supposed to be Mistystar's I believe. Do you have her permission? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:00, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

We decided not to use that system. It's first come, first serve. 15:02, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

In any case, Misty isn't the OA. Icethroat is. 15:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

When did we decide this? I've heard nothing of it. And Misty redid it, so it's technically hers. If you redo, it's yours. Looks at the list, it's listed under her name. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Here. And Misty didn't redo it, she only added stripes to the old image. 15:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Revise that. It isn't totally first come first serve, but you can claim rights to a couple of your original images if you please. But people can put them up for approval in any case. It's only if the OA asks for it that it becomes theirs. 15:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fine. Is this discussion linked to anywhere? If not, it should be linked on the talk page, because none of the project will know about it otherwise. And just to clarify, she DID redo it, I checked the tweak archives and it said Redone. Anyways, make it a bit less yellow. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moving on from that. >.> She mislabeled it, I think... nothing was changed but the stripes. 15:25, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you redden the earpink, since it looks grey right now? 18:06, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

They're brown, an appropriate color for this type of cat. However if someone else agrees I shall change it. 02:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

i agree, they look grey,make them pink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'll change them, but not to pink. 04:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made the inner ears more brown than gray. 19:47, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think brown was the right color. They should be a pinkish-grey (I don't know what you originally had. XP). Breeze whisker  21:56, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Brown is not the right color for any earpink. I don't know what made you think it was.... anyways, it should be red or pink, or any shade of that. Take the earpink from Sandstorm's image maybe. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, cats cat have brown inner ears. A cat's inner ear and nose often reflect its fur color, just as their skin does. =_= But fine. Based on popular opinion, I've changed it. Re-uploaded. 01:34, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the rump. <span style="">21:18 Thu Dec 15

Re-uploaded. 15:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 20:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Shadepelt (A) - For Approval
Please don't say about the color, I had a hard time :( Grayflower10 16:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are you a member of the PCA? I don't see your name on the apprentice list.... And if I understand right, you can't post chararts unless you're a member. You can go join though. Anyways, lighten the whole image and get rid of the white specks on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

The front page of PCA says that non-members can donate art. And Gray actually reserved it, so it's fine I think. ^^ She's the first non-member I've seen do the thing right. 16:40, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I did ask to join :) Grayflower10 17:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fill those two white pixels on her forehead? 18:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the pelt into the earpink. 18:05, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement like the one on the tutorial. Som eof the placements are wrong. <span style="">02:09 Wed Dec 14

Shading placement is the artist's choice, Sweetflower. As long as it makes sense, we can't tell anyone to make it match the tutorial. 02:59, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please make the earpink look pink. 19:49, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be pink, as the color is picked off the other images and dark gray/black cats often have gray inner ears. 01:35, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Frecklewish (A) - For Approval
If Icy wants this, she can have it since she originally did it. Took all the colors from her kittypet charart. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 18:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

-Dies of the awesomeness of this charart- Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">00:12 Wed Dec 14

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:12, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Put mottles in her fur. I can see them on the kittypet pixil though I think they need to be tweaked. 05:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't the right colour, either. It's too grey. Also, Ivy: her kittypet image is fine; I think it's beautiful. 01:34, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the delay. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 17:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Swapped around the colors, thanks to Oblivion! ;) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could maybe add/bright the highlights so it matches the KP image better? This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

There should also be lighter mottles as well. No problem :D 01:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:40, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Woah now I can see why you're deputy. Anywho darken the shading and the ear pink a tad. Lovely! - 03:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (A) ~ CBA
Comments? 15:35, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Lighten the left earpink a bit. 19:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Maybe add a little shading between the front legs and lighten the top of the tail. Breeze whisker  21:42, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Also the shading on the head is a little wrong, and there has to be more highlights (or something) on the tail. But is looks cute! 21:45, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and i hadn't noticed, the earpink on the left ear looks a little too bright. 21:46, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is correct, and the ear-pink is like that because one has shading. Lighten the shading please! <span style="">00:03 Thu Dec 15

Re-uploaded. 01:40, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the second white pixel in the eye? This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:58, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:54, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! CBA? <span style="">22:41 Fri Dec 16

Kestrelflight (MCA) - For Approval
Ew, I don't really care for this one >.> Comments for improvement? 22:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the head shading. <span style="">22:43 Wed Dec 14

You don't like it Ivy? I love this @_@ Tone down theear pink a little bit. 01:08, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the earpink. Amazing. *.* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just don't because for some reason, it doesn't look right to me. 01:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/Define the haunch shading, I love this. 04:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyleaf(A) - For Approval
It's my first Charart. Yay! Isn't she cute? I might of messed up with the eyes. comments? 22:23, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's taking a while to find the new image I did. No the weird extremely stretched old apprentice pizel, or a red link, or nothing. I guess it's coming soon. -_- 22:24, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yay it worked! 22:35, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more and blur it :3 <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:38, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes look a bit too yellow, make them greener like her warrior image. 22:41, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose black, and it seems like there's some missing lineart there, so fix that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:01, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more. <span style="">00:12 Thu Dec 15

Reuploaded. Missing lineart? You mean the nose thing? Hmm, I'll try, one sec. 00:44, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:50, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nosepink gray. 17:12, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed nosepink. 22:44, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Loudsplash, the nose pink should be black for a black cat, so fix it again, sorry. -- 00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And make the earpink fill the whole ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I'll fix the nosepink, but...the earpink is in the whole ear. What do you mean by that? 02:06, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, fixed the eyes a bit. Can't wait till this is CBA! I mean, *clears throat* if it is. :3 17:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear and darken the shading in the eyes. <span style="">22:44 Fri Dec 16

Dappletail (A)- For Approval
Comments? <span style="">23:47 Wed Dec 14

She also has a white back right paw. Add it? 23:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Lighten the white chest just a little. 00:52, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

That's shading, and it's fine Wildheart, this image is perfect! (Once you add the black paw if she has one ;) <span style="">12:16 Thu Dec 15

No, I think it needs to be lighten just a tad to match the other images. (it almost look just plain white in the warrior image >.<)  20:38, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! I took ALL colors from Dappletail's elder image(The white) so if it's to plae, don't blame me! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:28, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Calm down Maple, there's no need to get angry. 22:01, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Not getting mad, just defiending my charat :3 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Me sorry. Didn't mean for my comment to upset you. 3:  22:51, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wait I'm confused, what do you mean your charart Maple? 0.o This is Wildy's image.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:09, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, i did her warrior image! Mistypebble was complaing about Dappletail's warrior image's white being to pale, to which, i said i took all colors from her elder image. I felt like my image was being insluted, so I defined Dappletail's warrior iamge. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ohhh Ok. And I don't think Misty was saying it was too pale on here warrior image.... she was saying this should match that I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lol I leave for two days, and then I come back to a complicated debate XD I'm not lightening the white as it's so dark because of shading, and I can't lighten the shading without making it inconsistent. I think there should be darker shading on the warrior image to make it match. <span style="">21:59 Fri Dec 16

Softwing (A) - For Approval
Took all the Colors from her warrior charart. Changes may not be showing yet. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 15:56, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make her a girl. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  17:06, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Haha... Wrong blank. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 17:18, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if I'm just being a n00b, but when I withdrew her I asked if I could post her at a later date, when I had time to work on her, and I was told sure. I kinda thought I'd have until my two weeks to have a charart reserved were up. ^^; If not, maybe lighten the tops of the paws a bit? Breeze whisker  21:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Breezewhisker. Sorry, but withdrawn is withdrawn. When a charart is withdrawn, the timelimit expires and is up for grabs once again. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but people did tell me I could do that. It's fine, I can find something else. But I'm still irritated I can't be told correctly. Breeze whisker  00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

We did that with the maker of Plumwillow's image, I don't understand why Breeze couldn't do the same 00:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Since when? But I did ask Iceheart about this and she says that once a charart is withdrawn it's fair game again. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was snappy. But it's fine. I can pick someone else, and she's already working on it. It's not like there isn't a surplus of projects. It's just a small mixup. Breeze whisker  00:54, December 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * It's fine Breeze. Thanks for being so awesome :) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:42, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt. A)~ For Approval
Comments? 16:11, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you tweak the stripes to conform to his body's shape? It looks really flat like this. 16:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Twist the jaw - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 17:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 00:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and make them curve more on the shoulder and head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Im not tweaking the stripes again. Im quite happy with them. 19:36, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ferretclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I'm putting this here on behalf of FerretclawLover, who just joined the wiki and PCA today but can't edit this page yet. I think it's great for a first charart. ^^ Comments? 16:46, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely for a first charart. :) Add shading to the back leg farthest from us, lighten the cream a bit, and smudge/blur the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  17:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:39, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful charart. :) Define the shading, but lighten it on the heel of his back foot (one closest to us) and blur the shading on his belly and front leg. (one closest to us) Also, his back leg (farthest away x3) doesn't look like the same color of the other spots. 20:35, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also, erase the cream on the front foot and on his belly that leaked over. (I feel like I'm talking to myself...) 20:52, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

x3 But we know your not. Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. (This is ver lovely!) <span style="">21:15 Thu Dec 15

Define the tail shading. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 21:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Frecklewish (MCA) - For Approval
I actually really like her :3 02:19, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I do too! :3 Bring down the highlights a little. And, normally, the lighter part in the eyes starts in the bottom part, not the top...but I'm no expert. I actually like the eyes that way. 02:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

The eye is the artists choice. :3 02:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And the highlights are fine. Redden the earpink a bit though? This is gorgeous! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is fantastic! Maybe define the tail shading a bit? Love it! 09:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And actually, since the highlight is at the top of the eye, it would go lighter to darker, not the other way around. 12:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 12:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! He should have more stripes. 12:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Icestorm has dibs on this image, did you get permission to do this image? 16:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even if you were allowed to, hmm. The eye needs more contrast in shades, and needs to be a tiny tad less neon Define the shading just a bit. 17:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm isn't active right now, so I don't know if she would be able to lay claim to any of her images. Try and thin out the middle of the stripes on the tail by a pixel or two. Also, the eyes look like they're blue with a tint of green. Did you color pick right from the warrior/deputy? 19:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even know Icestorm had dibs on the image... I actually just chose the color, since his eyes are an ice blue shade. 20:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (A) - For Approval
Posting this for Brightstripes because she can't edit the page yet. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 13:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading a tad. 18:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink to give it a bit more of a realistic look. 18:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" on the haunch and shoulder a bit bigger. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) ~ For Approval
Ugh...sloppy. I dun like this one. Please please please tell me it needs improvements! I'm fine if you decline this one; it's horrible. 14:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a lot. 15:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

We don't decline chararts based on how they look or our personal opinions on them. You're just being hard on yourself. Make the nose a tad bit darker and blur the haunch shading some 18:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, as they say, our worst critic is ourselves. Blur the stripes just a tad. 18:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and blur the edges of the stripes a lot, actually. Notice how they're not as visible on the Warrior image as they are on here? If you need help, don't be afraid to ask. 19:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. And redden it a bit too. 19:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MCA) - For Approval
He's my favourite character of all time! I copied the stripes from the apprentice image very precisely, and that was hard. Comments? 18:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

You did wonderful, Moonleaf. Define the shading a little. 18:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 18:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (A) ~ For Approval
I think it's actually okay. Comments? 18:06, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oi! This is sooooo much better than my Robinwing! If anything, I say the warrior should be tweaked a bit, because I know for a fact it doesn't match. This is so much better. xD Lighten up the shading on the back patch of white. Other than that, this is pretty dang amazing. 18:31, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

One-eye (A) - For Approval
This was done pretty quickly :P. Comments? 18:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think she should have the faint indication of a pupil in her eye, as well as her warrior and queen. 18:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this? 18:51, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yup! I think that's good 18:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the blind eye more glossy? Maybe not, as people tend to correct my critiques. 19:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, that's not half bad of an idea. But, how would someone go about that? Maybe adding white to the eye and blurring it, perhaps? I have no idea. 19:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at a few images, you could try making the pure white shine a little bigger and the edges of the eyes looked slightly tinged blue, but you don't have to do that, just what I observed :3 19:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (MCA) - For Approval
Please, someone remind me never to copy a complicated tabby again DX. I do not like this at all. The stripes all fail. 19:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white. 20:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure this needs to be uploaded over the old file. 20:33, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It does. Don't put caps on mca. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white blends into the brown. Also, there is a lack of shading on the neck and chest. 21:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (A)~ For Approval
I find it icky. Tell me how to fix it. 19:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I think this is amazing! Lighten the nose a bit, and smudge the orange into the grey on the foreleg closest to us. 19:34, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- 20:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (P3) - For approval
Not sure uploading this will work. If it doesn't, let me try again. Anyway, that was quick. Comments? 19:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay it worked. :3 20:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  20:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, so sorry Cloudskye! I tried to edit, it restored changes and I clicked publish before I reallized it deleted your edit. Well, I changed the name, anyway. 20:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It happens. I changed the file name at the top of the page for you. Now, darken the shading just a tad. 20:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Re-uploaded. Fixed shading. 20:24, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

In the fold in his neck, there appears to be some lighter pixils than the surrounding pelt. Make sure they match ^^  22:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) ~ For Approval
Okay, you know me. I'm awful at spotting waste. xP I like this one! Comments? 21:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Haha, yep the waste. =P Anyway, make the earpink closest to us fill the entire ear then smudge the pelt into it. :3 21:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, there's waste around the tail and near the <--- ear. Also it needs to be a tad lighter. They eyes look like the pelt blurred into it a little, and the <--- side of each eye isn't colored in at all. There's some faded lineart around the tail. Define the shading a lot. Sorry I'm finding so many problems! 21:29, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my, there's also a lot of waste below the face and neck, around the paws, and under the front paw that is farthest from us. 21:31, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, she said she saw the waste. >.> 22:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (A) ~ For Approval
Here he is...I hate the earpink! <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)