Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 144

Turtle Tail (ES) - Approved
I got told I could have the small amount of white, so I dunno. I can finally post this, jeez. Thank goodness.

So pretty c: could you maybe make the tail kinda fluffier? 04:28, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

It says her tail is short and stubby, (hence her name) so I don't want to really change that since I'm only following the description.

A few tufts on the tip of the tail wouldn't hurt. This is absolutely beautiful! =) damn though, her previous pattern was definitely pretty. Its a shame it had to be redone. 04:54, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

You do realize turtles don't have tufts of anything on their tails, right? I'm not trying to be stubborn, but since her tail is canonically said to be like a turtle's, and short and stubby, I don't see why the extra tufts of fur are necessary- it'll end up like the tail on the previous images, which aren't stubby. They were a frayed mess.

its fine. unless shes like really fluffy its probably not that tufty, and probably really short if its gonna be named after a turtle of all things. 05:20, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

I imagine people want it to be fluffy and thick at the base but come to a point is because turtle's tails tend to be pointed. Dunno though. This looks great! :D Define the shading on the face? Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:46, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Removed white and defined facial shading. And tbh unless she's called fluffy, I really don't think I need to change it. I also have all of the other images like this, and unless it says fluffy, then it should stay- I don't think I'd be getting told to make it fluffy had I used a short-haired blank.

Define the shading some more. 17:05, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

I think you should make the tail tip more "sharp ended" as it's on her other images. Still personal preferences though you can ignore that.

Could you define the earpink? I literally can't see any.

Re-uploaded.

Comments before approval? 03:57, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Approved.