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Wind (Q) ~ For Approval
Finally snagged a queen :P Comments? 19:27, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink a little bit Leaf-storm,19:28,October 15,2011 (UTC)

I'll wait for a second opinion on that, since I used the ear pink color from her images. 19:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least lighting the shading on the belly. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  19:34, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the earpink, and blur the shading some more. 19:38, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a little. 23:11, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten all the shading. Add depth to the eye. 23:12, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is a lighter color pixel on the left front paw, blur the shading.  Owl   X    G    l    itt    er   4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:35, October 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded  12:10, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wind's eyes in her leader charart have a ring of orange in them, which I think makes her stand out in an interesting way. I think you should try to match that. 17:04, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''You'll have to zoom in to see it. 20:31, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The orange was on the outer part, and it was a bold orange... sorry, poking at it. 01:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the ear-pink a tad. 19:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes aren't showing yet 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why should I blur it more? I think it seems fine. 20:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, you will blur the shading more if a more experienced member tells you to. I agree. It needs to have a nice, smooth transition between the lighting planes and blurring it makes this transition looks natural. I know that you're liscensed to have your artistic creativity, but as another fellow artist, I can see that it needs blurred. 21:07, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Even though it seems I didn't blur it, I did. 23:03, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Should I make it more to the color of her ears or just darken it in general? 20:16, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's supposed to be the same as the ear pink.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:17, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes are showing. 21:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Making a small bump. 20:05, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to be the same as the ear-pink, as long as it's not a black cat or anything, which this clearly isn't. Any way, blur and lighten the shading right next to the front arm closes to use. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! [ 20:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading along her back. 20:45, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose color are the same Dark. I took the color from the middle of her ear. And I'll get to it Speckle. 20:55, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok the changes aren't showing. Shading the back is tough D: 21:19, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the tail and blur the shading. 22:31, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Make the pupil skinner. 00:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be some white in the eye as well? 16:29, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll work on this soon. And there is Shadewing. 20:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is a black square in her eye........Otherwise nice job! <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:27, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the shading looks too dark so that parts of the pelt looks brown. Also blur and smudge the ear pink. 00:17, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear oink and define the shading on the tail. 01:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading on this is making me angry ._. I'll live x3. 12:46, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and this will be ready. 22:16, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Safe to say I'm satisfied with the shading for once ^^. 23:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The eye away from us needs a white dot or summin. Otherwise I think it looks good. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 10:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)'''

Blur the ear-pink. 13:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:51, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. <span style="">00:26 Wed Oct 26

Reuploaded -- 11:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot what defien means x_x Sorry for the blonde moment. 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading easier to see. =) 20:45, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:00, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the stomach near the front foot needs to be lightened please. :3 . 22:05, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and face. 10:56, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Blurred it, but it doens't look like it D: -- 12:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It may be me, but I am kind of confused with your light source. You have the lighter shading on this side of the head <--- but on the body, you seem to have the light source coming from directly in front. O.o 22:20, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it a bit larger. 01:53, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did as you said Squirrel. I'm used to shading that way, and I used one of the shading styles to shade it. 19:11, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the belly some more? 00:16, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse ._. 11:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur it some more..

However, it looks odd to me because the light source seems to be coming at two angles. I'd say that you should move the light source on the head to our right a little. Someone can correct me if they think it looks fine. 22:20, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, i'm with you atelda, it does look odd. Rain face &lt;3 01:05, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Correct Atelda. Also lighten the shading on the belly and make it somewhat smaller. Great job! 02:05, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to say she's correct again. Rainface already did, it's unnessesary. Blur the belly shading some more. -- 20:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Back now, and did everything else asked :3  12:21, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and brighten it. <span style="">19:54 Sat Nov 5

Also darken the shading and smudge the ear pink alot. !!!!

Reuploaded  13:05, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar Alt. (D) ~ For Approval
Okay, so, I do realize the shading looks stiff and un-blurred, but i've blurred it to the max on GIMP. Also, The tawny reference is from Oakhearts tawny color, and i've posted a cite on Leopardstar's page already. Comments? :S. 01:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename the file Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png and put delete tags on the other images you uploaded. Add some shading under the jaw and brighten the earpink. <span style="">01:10 Tue Oct 18

How do I add an image when it's in source mode? :S. 01:18, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

On the bar (where you would get your signature) press the button that looks like a picture fame, and then put the name of the file into the part where it says: "Example.jpg". ^-^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay...Reuploaded Thanks. . 01:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

nooo, name it Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png(its case sensative) :|- 01:52, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oi. That was....way too much work. It shouldn't have been like that. xD. 02:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

xD Redden the earpink as it almost blends in with the pelt. Maybe blur the edges of the shading, but otherwise this looks great! 02:19, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Again, way too much work. xD Anyway, fixing the charart itself was pretty easy. And BlueOrca, it should have been Leopardstar.deputy.alt2 becuase it just made another file of the first alt. :3 Reuploaded.. 02:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 18:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the head a bit. 20:11, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I think it reuploaded.. 00:40, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur shading. 00:56, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading? You should also define the shading on the tail and make the earpink smaller. 22:51, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the earpink. 12:20, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good. Lighten the shading and also smudge the ear pink and shading too. 16:09, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Omg this is so pretty! Just lighten the shading.

Lighten the ear pink a little. 01:18, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erm...I accidentially closed the tab and lost all my layers, i'm working on re-doing it. . 06:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Feather, you still working on this? I know you're redoing it and all, but you still only have 7 days, and you've taken 8 since your last reupload. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my gosh! I forgot all about this! I feel so ashamed now, Give me a moment and I'll have the new one up. . 22:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. There. Nobody has any idea how much I love this aside from the earpink. xD. 00:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. Hmm... This is interesting. I like it, Feather! 01:08, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Errmm..? Is this thing working? xD Re-uploaded. And Thanks Skye. :D. 01:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Beautiful! 10:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Thanks! Re-uploaded. 19:05, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The face highlights is much too light. Also where is your light source? It just looks randomly placed. O.o 02:26, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

That face highlight isn't a face highlight, it's a face face, like any other realistic cat. and I used the shading spots everyone else uses. . 03:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous Feather! Could you darken the shading a bit though? And the face DOES look a bit lighter than the rest of the image, but I'm not sure if that's on purpose or not. If not, could you make it the same darkness as the rest of the pelt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:26, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is supose to be paler on the face. If you look, it's on the front paws too. And it's also suppose to be on the chest and bottom of the tail. Re-uploaded! :D. 06:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a lot and make it a little less purplish. 00:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely. I think the earpink colour is fine; however, it could be smaller. Add some shading on the muzzle or add some mottles so that it looks less bare. <span style="">05:47 Sun Oct 30

^Thanks! And there we go...although as for the muzzle, I darkened it up with some shading, and I just think it looks kind of weird now. :3 . 13:24, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mottles. 22:22, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the face highlights and the ear. Also lighten the shading too. 02:11, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I actually think the shading needs to be DARKENED not lightened, and not everyone uses highlights Sandstorm. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh. I need to Withdraw this, this is the second time i've lost all the layers, and I don't have time to re-do it every time. :( . 22:03, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Very well then, Feathermoon. Anyone who wants to can take over. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:19, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over since Jag just got archived. Sorry to hear you can't do this anymore :( 22:59, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

My goodness Ivy, this is GORGEOUS! The only thing I can find wrong is, can you define the earpink bit? I seriously don't see anything else wrong with this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:09, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely stunning! Just extend the shoulder highlight upwards if you use highlights and if not just thin out the neck shading. 11:36, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Glad you guys like it! 04:41, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur the neck shading a bit. 13:19, November 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded that's about as much as I can get it  15:13, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. This is marvelous! <^^> -- 15:31, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 19:59, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:46, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt. Q) ~ For Approval
*shivers in disgust* This is disgusting :S she looks like a chipmunk with a nut in its mouth :| my least fave charart i've ever made. 15:21, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the ones like in my image. 15:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patch on the far side of her face needs to extend all the way to the end. Make the stripes on her face go up and down and define them. You smudged the lineart on top of where her arms are. Add more stripes to her patches. 15:24, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

OK how do I make the stripes match teh other image and where is the smudged lineart. Would you mind showing me I don't see it. Also I'm trying to match them so the only place I see that needs more stripes is teh haunch. And seriously does she not look like a chipmunk with a nut in her mouth? LOL REUPLOADED 15:31, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 15:36, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED hehehe this is so creepy... 15:43, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the haunch more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:56, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the patches and make the stripes match on all of the patches. 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Seperate the patches on her back. Look at her background picture on The Rescue and you can see they are seperated, plus if you have the book she's seen laying down frequently, so you can use that for help as well. The patches on her face wouldn't come down so far. Again, looking at how she looks in the manga should help, if you don't have it look at Harper Collins Browse Inside, it's free and I believe the first page she is on she is shown laying down. 23:07, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I like this MUCH better now. REUPLOADED. She's growing on me :) 11:36, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes still look a little off. If you need help, ask Stoneclaw. She may be able to give you advice on how to make the stripes like hers. 14:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might have smudged/blurred the nose because it looks huge xD 15:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The whole face lineart looks funny. Could you paste a new lineart over it? I could do it if you need help. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:42, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 21:05, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Could you help me Paleh? 11:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patch on the belly/chest area too. 21:32, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded - Kay, fixed all the lineart. :) Had to redo the eyes, but I tried not to touch anything else. If you need help with anything else, fell free to ask. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Try to fix the stripes.. They look irreuglar, since they are a bit too thick. Try to match the ones on Stoneclaws image ^-^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:43, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the back paw and darken the shading a touch. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading specifically on the cream and blur the tail stripes. 20:16, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, add either a highlight or shading on the haunch, and blur the place where brown meets crem on the back left leg. 23:52, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular as well. 10:34, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the overall shading and define the highlights if there are any. DJCandyBud 03:55, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED O_O moooo 13:08, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match her alt leader more 00:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, um. If I did it wouldn't match, er the manga. And that SERIOUSLY bothers me...if I have people seconding this I guess i'll hafta live with it but can you explain how to make them match cuz I had trouble before and that's why I switched them to match the manga in the first place. 11:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

They need to match Stoneclaw's version, not the manga. We're not allowed to copy the exact pelt style of a character from the Warriors books because those images are copyrighted. If you're that confused, then ask Stoneclaw for help, as she's the one who made the leader image. The two cannot be different. 18:16, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

LOL I was just about to reupload it XD anyways REUPLOADED  18:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and smoothen the stripes. 20:26, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, more pink, and blur it. 20:54, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink is triangular, and I will not make it more pink because I copied it from the leader alt. And if I blur it any more than it is it'll blur the lineart. I'll do the stripes later. 11:29, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the ones on my image, and the earpink is not the same. 17:54, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe working from the comic instead of the alt leader image would help? Just a suggestion That way you could see her stripe pattern from different angles. 18:51, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and I also agree with Shellheart. 22:49, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, she can't use the one from the "manga", because the stripes aren't the same. We're not supposed to match the designs 100%, because those images are copyrighted from HarperCollins. It also says that in the guidelines. 02:59, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I meant she could use it as a reference, Cloudy. >.> I know the copyright laws, and you know I do. But we agreed to try to match the images the alts come from as closely as possible, didn't we? I thought it may be helpful for her if she saw the stripes on Leafstar in the "manga" from multiple angles, as that helps me when I'm trying to draw things. But if that won't match the alt leader, then you're right. 15:23, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt.K) ~ CBA
Comments? . 20:52, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, 21:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripe a little? I can barley see them, not a whole lot just a little. 21:15, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Bur the earpink a little bit. 21:19, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we decided quite a few times that he wasn't gonna get an alt for being called ginger? Unless this is an alt for something that I missed/isn't on his page? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:53, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think this is for being ginger, but I don't think it should be declined, since ginger is different from golden brown. Ginger is Firestar-color, and golden brown is...Thornclaw-color. They're completely different. Since cats get alts for simply having minor changes like white paws, then there's no reason to decline this. 21:57, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:26, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail tip a little bit. This looks really good Squirrel. 15:41, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Sweet! :) 23:56, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make this more ginger. Right now it definitely looks more like golden-brown than ginger. <span style="">22:56 Wed Nov 2

Re-uploaded. 23:57, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

still needs to be more ginger 00:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you redden the earpink a bit? Maybe make it more like his warrior and apprentice? 20:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 00:08, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks kind of light, but that could just be me though. 00:02, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:05, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make this more ginger-y. <span style="">19:57 Sat Nov 5

Can you give me a hex code? 20:24, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and the stripes. You can hardly see them. Great job! 22:51, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to redo the whole image; just take and put it in a new layer and then adjust the opacity so that it makes the image seem more ginger. I learned that trick from Ivystripe :3 <span style="">22:55 Sat Nov 5

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Wildheart! 23:48, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 21:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Alt.Q) - For Approval
Well, if Whispering Breeze got an alt. for being described as a tabby, Willowbreeze should get an alt for being described as a solid cat. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:25, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad, especially in the areas it would be darker, such as under her chin, her belly, and her tail? 01:31, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:08, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but can you blur the shading some? 21:45, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. Rain face &lt;3 23:24, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading next to her hind leg? <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:23, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and redden it. Isn't the nose supposed to be pink? 20:47, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

No. If it's a gray cat, their nose should be a darker version of the pelt color. 20:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the delay. Life's been kicking my butt lately... - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:21, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlight on her front left leg. 15:22, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:02, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Was she actually called solid gray, or just gray? <span style="">19:59 Sat Nov 5

It was in the manga, she was SOLID gray. I checked too, since it seemed unlikely that they said she was solid gray in the book. XD Could you blur the shading more? This is lovely! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:43, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Beatiful! Some of your best work! But you need to darken the ear pink and center it. It's too high in the ear. 22:52, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:35, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 19:46, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Redstar (Alt. L) - For Approval
Ginger and bracken are two different colours, so comments? 02:22, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! You reserved it just before I was going to! Anyways, blur the tail-tip and brighten the shading, or is it highlight? I'm not to good at this, the white circles. 10:32, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink, it's a bit bright. This is really good! 19:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

On his page, it doesn't say where he was described as bracken-colored. 00:05, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Now it does. :P Also, I liked the shading settle, but I brightened it. 01:14, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight just a tad. 20:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. 01:26, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge/move the chest highlight to his right a tad. 09:07, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:25, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make him a bit less green. 01:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. La di di. 17:33, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't really look bracken colored to me. Maybe try this color? That was the best I could find when I searched for 'bracken colored' XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  18:38, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The sample was just a bit florescent on him so I dulled it a bit. How's that color? 20:45, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenheart (Lo) ~ CBA
Tell me if I'm wrong, but if Spiderstar gets a loner image so should Brackenheart. Comments? 17:32, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more and blur the tail highlights. (If any)  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  19:48, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading everywhere except his legs. 20:03, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:26, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure. Techincally, Spiderstar and Brackenheart never left the Clan, chosing to spend the rest of their days in the gorge with the elders. They were still part of a group, would they be loners? 20:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

There's a discussion on the talk page about it, go have your say. 20:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well if he stil gets one, brighten the earpink. 20:45, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:14, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

This looks really good. Blur the shading on his left back leg. Rain face &lt;3 23:21, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and the ear pink. Blur the legs too. 01:26, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

^_^ I think the stripes are fine, but feel free to contradict me if I'm wrong. Also, I think the earpink is fine. Add depth to the eye, please. Very nice. 02:58, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't it artist's choice? 19:05, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded I darkened the stripes, but the ear-pink matches his MC image. Sandstorm: I assume you meant to blur the shading. 20:23, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a little bit more so it matches the MC image. <span style="">23:17 Thu Nov 3

Re-uploaded 13:02, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:42, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt.W2) ~ Declined
Comments? If Pinestar gets a fox-colored alt, then so does he. I got all the colors from Pinestar, including earpink, so I'm not changing those. 23:10, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well if he's supposed to get an alt for being called "fox-coloured", his pelt should be ginger. <span style="">23:13 Thu Nov 3

Blur the ear pink. 23:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I just changed the red scale thing to redden it. 23:20, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I redid it; the red scaled version looked too red. 23:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

This just looks like a tabby version of his normal image though. Barely any difference. And he wasn't even mentioned with stripes, those are just being added because this is supposedly a form of ginger. And I'm pretty sure his normal charart is pretty close to fox-color. I don't think this should get an alternate, but that's just me. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:45, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

If Oakheart is "reddish-brown" then, yes, fox-coloured is pretty much the same. I agree, this shouldn't get an alt. 19:03, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

There really is not much of a difference So I belive this will be declined. 22:55, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm declining this due to a majority of people thinking it isn't needed. If many others disagree, feel free to change the heading back, but for now it's declined. I'm truly sorry D:  15:39, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Talon Alt. (CG) ~ For Approval
Well, he was described like this in Cats of the Clans, so here he is.. I am strangely attracted to alternates.. ._. Fail tabby/Cave Guard xD  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  02:33, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps thicken the tabby markings (optional) and I'd smudge the mud in all directions. Also, blur where the white meets with the light brown and perhaps make it whiter... Awesome! 02:39, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have a white chest? Cause this seems to be going off into his shoulder. xD (Correct me if wrong. )<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 02:42, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Made the heading say 'for approval'. Blur the lighter chest a little more, and there is a bunch of waste between the two front paws. Good job! 15:41, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's actually a lot of waste all over the image. 18:52, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah, I was doing this really quickly, so that's why its all messed up. xD Hopefully I got rid of all the waste, made the chest more white (shading caused it to go tannish xD), blurred the mud and the whites going off his shoulder?? Shoot.. Dx Oh, and changes are not showing...  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  19:32, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... he has a white chest. Your white only covers less than half of his chest. Look at a leader image with a white chest or something. It goes down to the middle of where their front legs meet. 19:35, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the muzzle counts as the chest, correct me if I'm wrong, because it's white too. 23:57, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

In Cats of the Clan, he is shown with a white muzzle. I added it to his trivia on his page btw. ;) 00:06, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There, is that any good? :3  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:13, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks Atelda! And smudge/blur the mud a bit more. 00:37, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tiny bit, and do as Sweetflower suggested. This is neat! 00:53, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened and blurred the mud. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   01:16, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a tad. I can barley see it. 16:29, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the white and blur it. <span style="">20:06 Sat Nov 5

Reuploaded Brightened the earpink and fixed the chest. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:49, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I still think the white on the chest needs to be extanded and slightly darken the shading if you will. 22:56, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Also lighten the white a lot and smudge the mud. <span style="">23:01 Sat Nov 5

Try and match the picture in CotC better, make the stripes fainter on the back, add a dark tail tip, and add a white part around his eyes. Here's a ref if you don't already have one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened/extended the white a bit more, smudged the mud, darkened the shading a tad, added the white part around the eyes and made it look a bit more like the picture in CotC. And thanks for the image, Paleclaw, I had to keep on looking in the book since I couldn't find one online x3 M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   13:45, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Smudge the white chest a bit, it'll look more coolio. -- 15:28, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smudged the chest a bit. :3 M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   15:48, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge and blur the white, mainly on the face, smudge the mud more, and define the shading, especially on the white parts. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:31, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Alt.D) ~ For Approval
Okay, this is based on his image in Cats of the Clans. I knew this cat was him and not Leafstar as the other cat image that could have been him (the cat on the top) matched the image of Leafstar on the cover of SkyClan's Destiny. I tried to match the image the best I could, which wasn't easy considering the fact that all I had to work with was a disembodied head and chest. XD Comments? 19:47, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

...this isn't even fair. How can you make such an amazing charart? Erase the stray pixel above his ear and define the earpink a tad. I adore this. <span style="">20:05 Sat Nov 5


 * O *hugs* It is mine now. >.< Its awesome! Lighten the shading a bit. ;3 M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:47, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you can't have three images up at once. You'll need to either withdraw one of your tweaks or withdraw this. Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:55, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, it's all good. I withdraw Whitestorm. 00:34, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Kay. :) Could you add/define the earpink a ton, I can't tell if it's there or not. Though it might just be my computer, the colors are kinda acting funky on it today. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:36, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, I tried. I used the colors from the image, but I think I've defined it a bit. I don't want to deviate too much. 00:49, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Why? My Sunfish charart buddy does so much better with charart's then me :( Any way, the stray pixel is still there. Rain  face &lt;3 01:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainy, you're fine. You'll get it with practice. 01:13, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think should be made using the warrior lineart. If you didn't notice, the name in the book said Leafdapple and note Leafstar. Sharpclaw couldn't be deputy if Leafstar still went by the name Leafdapple. 02:56, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, do I have to? I used the deputy lineart because I was looking at the image from the Warrior's App, which called her Leafstar. TT.TT 03:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was going straight from the book. Since you mentioned it was in the Warriors app, I think it could be made for BOTH ranks... 03:05, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was about to mention that, actually. Yeah, I agree. 03:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

In the meantime, dull the ear pink a bit. It's too bright. 03:08, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled it up. Please, no more ear-pink comments. This is the first time in a while that I've been happy with it. 03:18, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is 100% epicness. It looks like one of the neck stripes is going into the white chest. Can you fix that? If you know what I'm talking about. -- 15:09, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like that in the image this is based on, so I think I'll keep it. Thanks, though! 15:20, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (Alt.D) ~ For Approval
I really hate the shading and the ear pink. >_< Comments? 20:33, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the ear pink tons. Make the ear pink smaller and center it as well. 20:38, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I knew that would happen. But I still dont like it and I blured over it a bunch... 22:12, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink color less neon/bright. Dull it. 22:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tryed to dullen it but I ended up darkening it....I had now idea how do dull it to be truthful... 22:44, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Give the eye some depth, not just one flat color. Blur the shading more, add some between the foreleg and haunch, and have less on the tail. 22:46, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 22:57, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I thought the shading was funny. And I did my best with the depth. Looks better now! 23:02, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. <span style="">23:03 Sat Nov 5

Blur the shading a lot and thicken it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:42, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs major blurring, fix that. 00:07, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading for you. Anyway, redo the shading so it conforms to the contours of his body and add depth to his eye, maybe change the color to match that image, which is where the alt came from. You might want to tone down you highlights, too. 01:00, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did the hole thing and I added the depth as much as I could. Comments? 01:43, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. 03:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blured and blured but it doesn't look to different. Sorry you guys... 03:17, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I believe this needs to be renamed Stonefur.deputy.alt.png 03:48, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Want a really useful tip for blurring the shading so it looks natural? Take your blur tool, set it on "60", then blur the edges of the shading with a small brush, then get a slightly larger brush, use the blur tool, set it on "100", then blur where you smudged. You may have to do it more than once, but once it looks natural, then you're good to go! 05:13, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink, and make it more triangular. 13:17, November 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded @Twilightheart I tryed but it just ended up with spaces and @ Shadewing I don't really know how to dullen the ear pink but...well I tryed! 16:22, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you if you want. 16:27, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

What with, Stoneclaw? 18:38, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

You don't know how to dull earpink? You just.. darken it.. Perhaps smudge the shading and then blur the smudges a lot. I do that sometimes. -- 19:51, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the shading worse...if possible... 20:19, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Spiderstar (Lo) ~ For Approval
Special thanks to Oblivion for helping when I was completly desperate! Anyways, comments? 01:40, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

You need to blur the stripes xD I sent it to you just after I had finished in Paint so you could blur them yourself. 01:41, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the shading/highlights. Also blurred stripes. 01:56, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights go in the proper place, since it looks like a big blotch of light in the middle. Also tone down the earpink, its too bright/hot pinkish it. Love the stripes! M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   02:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

And fix the miscolored lineart. Also make the eyes look right. (see the apprentice tutorial for how they're supposed to look) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  02:08, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

She can do the eyes any way she wants. It's how I did my eyes, and no one said anything about that. There's no specific guidelines for eyes. 02:10, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the background transparent. 02:54, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

But highlights in other places and make the ear pink much smaller. Don't let it take up the whole ear. Also redden it or darken it. Thicken some stripes and lighten the tail. Great! 03:20, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight a lot. It makes him look gray. 03:23, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. As far as I can tell, I only see the highlights. Good job so far! 05:10, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty good for your first charart! Define the tail highlights. 15:07, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Specifically define the shading along the shoulder and thighs. 19:50, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not sure what a lot of those words mean, but I did fix it. I ofund out we don't need highlights, so I took them out, making it look a lot better. I changed the ear-pink. Added shading. And fixed the stripes. Agh, I feel much better. (Thanks Snoweh!) 20:26, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more as in darken the edges of the charart and as you move into the main body start lightening the shading if you have the light source right in front of the cat. Redden/darken the earpink via the paint brush/burn tool. And blur the stripes more. Nice! 20:30, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Tried my best! Thanks! (I thought I would suck at this, but I'm doing ok now) 20:57, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be the same colour as his leader's, but this is nice. :D <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 20:58, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) - For Approval
Other one was declined. Changes aren't showing yet. Gosh, that pattern was so hard to copy, and it STILL doesn't look right. DX Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great, Paleclaw, it matches! Put some noticable shading on the forepaw farthest from us. 15:04, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

WAYYYYY better than my version. The marking were hard, right? Anyways, define the tail shading a bit. 15:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the base coat a bit, it looks a bit grayer than her other images? 16:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done, done, and done.

You forgot to sign x3 ) Lovely work! Can you blur the center of the ear pink? It looks solid ;) 20:33, November 6, 2011 (UTC)