Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 3

Crowfeather- Approved

 * Many might remember the first image I tried out when I first joined. I did Crowfeather along with Squirrelflight. Though Squirrelflight was made around the same time and approved, I never got around to edit poor Crowfeather. Since I finally have time on my hands I've reuploaded him. I remembered Kitsu saying I needed to re-add the line art back to him. So here's Crowfeather with the lineart back again and the same coloring. Comment please :) -- Shim-Shim Shimmering Crystals 06:39, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

That's really good! I couldn't do better than that! >_< --Leopardstar&#39;s Ultimate fan 13:46, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

The shading on his back looks... awkward. Also, the pink part of his ear looks like a perfume bottle instead of a triangle. G B 16:08, 8 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Yeah I remembered Kitsu saying something about it too. Well now here's the update version. I redid his ear and decided on my new way with shading. -- Shim-Shim Shimmering Crystals 17:34, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, now he looks like someone stuck their hands in like, five different types of black paint, and rubbed their hands all over him. He needs to be one color, with shading. The ear looks better, though. G B 17:54, 9 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Actually, GB, with some blending his hindquarter will be wonderfully shaded and look nicely 3D. Now, Shim, you just need to get the head and forequarters in the same way and blend everything together. The ear... I would love to see less pink because dark furred cats have dark skin. And the pink nose... Please do away with it, as it looks... rather out of place. Great improvements so far, I look forward to seeing you take it the rest of the way.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 15:57, 10 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Got it Kitsu. Here's the new uploaded version of Crowfeather. I did all what you said, but I think I took out too much pink. Comments please ^_^ -- Shim-Shim Shimmering Crystals 00:29, 12 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Personally, I think more pink can come out. I hate bright pink ears. They look terribly unnatural. Google some black cat pictures and you'll see what I mean. The hindleg looks great, now blend some more on the forequarters, try and get a more defined shoulder going on, and add shading to the head. You're doing great.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 03:49, 12 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Sure thing. Just to let everyone know I shall probably be away for about a week or two. Though a week is the least amount of time I'd give. So if this gets moved I under stand. Just to inform everyone.-- Shim-Shim Shimmering Crystals 02:00, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I'll be leaving this one, just so that no one starts their own version of him. This one is darn-near approved, and I'd have to have the work duplicated.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 16:57, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm back! And thank you so much Kitsu for holding Crowfeather. Well here's his updated version. I love how much he has improved.-- Shimmer Crytals 03:22, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Well no one has said anything so I decided to just update Crowfeather some myself.-- Shimmer Crystals 19:58, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
 * I like the image, but it looks smudged together and could be blended to take away the smudges. --Mallinois The Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked - Ui! 22:04, 28 February 2009 (UTC)


 * I can't blend him anymore believe me I tried, he just keeps looking the same over and over again. Kitsu did say it gave him that 3D effect though. I'll see what I can do tomorrow when I get out of training.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 02:36, 10 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I think that the eye is a few shades too dark. Maybe lighten it up a little, without becoming ice blue, or anywhere near it. (Crowfeather must have absoulutely NO similarities to hawkfrost!) Dawnfeather  08:36, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Personally I think this is really starting to look good. There are a few tiny things I've picked up though. Firstly, on the ear there is an area where it has spilled onto the black lineart and there is actually colour outside of the outline as well. Secondly, the highlighting above the eye needs to be blended a tiny bit more if possible. The eye looks really good in my opinion - I like the different shades you've put in.--Sandy Leader's Den 14:14, 7 April 2009 (UTC)


 * Finally some free time from test! Anyway UPDATED!!!! Now here's my new version of Crowfeather. I readded the lineart so it wouldn't look that way. I decided not to change the eye. I like doing it that way, it makes my pictures different from others. I also made him transparent now so there's no white background.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 01:31, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Nice! The one thing I see is that, where the belly/neck shading ends, it could be blended more. Otherwise, wonderful. I hope GB accepts this. --DarkHallows Lair 02:37, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Much better. Nice work Shim. I think this is ready for approval; it's definitely up to the standard of the other approved images--Sandy Leader's Den 17:11, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Voletooth - Approved
Okay, I tried an image of Voletooth. Constructive critisism welcome :)--Sandstar12 21:41, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

This brown has a slight tan tinge to it. Also, there's something in the background that looks like the shading of a white cat. G B 00:17, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

I sorted the background and darkened his colour a bit. --Sandstar12 12:02, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

That's really good! And reallistic! --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 15:41, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Thank you Leopardheart--Sandstar12 15:48, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Hm... you could also touch up the pink part of the ear a bit. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B 16:29, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, I increased the pink colour--Sandstar12 16:48, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

The color was fine; it's the fact that the ear looks like you just stuck it on and blended. It needs to be more of a triangle shape. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B 17:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, how about now?--Sandstar12 18:46, 11 November 2008 (UTC)


 * It's a good start, but there's still some work to do. The shading needs to be completed (why none on the muzzle?) and the shoulder needs some definition. The ear pink needs some blending, and the shade could be toned down (really bright pink never looks quite right). <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 17:48, 12 November 2008 (UTC)

I sorted the ear, added some shading around the muzzle and shoulder areas as well as some highlights on the flank and middle chest area. I also blended this shading more thoroughly. -- Sandy 19:02, 13 November 2008 (UTC)

I think its a beautiful pic, Sandy. The shading really gives it a 3D touch and blend. -- Bramble Bramble's Realm 19:19, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble!-- Sandy 20:35, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

Anything else needs doing?-- Sandy 21:12, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
 * It's looking really good, but I have a few things for you. The shoulder/neck shading is a little weird... I think because there's no shading creating any roundness for the head. The tummy/elbow/knee zone is pretty much unshaded and could use some. And the shading could all use a touch more blending, as there are a number of points where things look like markings rather than shading. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 16:33, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, I added some shading around the head and on the tummy/knee area. I also blended all the shading more thoroughly-- Sandy 17:37, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Looks Great! -- <font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mal <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">lin ois  20:36, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Yes! It finally uploaded - I edited the eye to add a highlight :) --<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 20:11, 9 February 2009 (UTC)


 * Blend it a bit more and mabye add highlights, just a tiny bit, but if highlights destroy the image, just keep it without. --<font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mallinois <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">The Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked - Ui! 22:06, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

I blended again and have added a highlight down the shoulders and back. The blending is as much as it will go--<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 20:41, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

I noticed some blurry outline whilst looking through my images and have fixed that --<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 08:13, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

The shading down his side on his back looks... I don't know,... bumpy? Yeah, I know cats aren't exactly perfetly smooth, but it looks as if his side is covered with various tumors! Dawnfeather 23:12, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

whoa! Thanks for pointing that out! Is this any better? I might increase the shading now because some of seems to have been lost with the blending...--<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 10:05, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Okay. Done --<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 10:10, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

There seems to be a splotch on the top of the back leg, and lack of shading in the middle of the tummy/chest. Other than that, it's wonderful. Good work, Sandy. Dawnfeather 08:11, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

Actually no. I take back what I said a few hours ago. It looks good NOW. Dawnfeather

Thanks Dawnfeather. Is there anything else to be done? --<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 17:10, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

I think this is ready for approval. Dawnfeather 23:24, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Feathertail - Approved
Alright, I fixed the pic. Kitsu, I buffed the shading a bit to make it look more 3-d. It is better now? (Sorry about the delay, I am working on Poppyfrost, my first tortie, and having trouble.) F  x  C  22:45, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

What happened to the ear and tail?--Redflare 22:48, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

The poor ear..the poor tail! What did you do to them? Any way, some more blended shading and it would look good. Fix the ear and tail. User:Mallinois  Coyote=background:Black>Coyote   The Doghouse  01:57, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Sorry. I am on my grandparents computer, so using Photobie. I fixed the lineart, at the expense of the transparent background. The background will be brought back as soon as I get back on my own laptop. F x  C  15:58, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * The outline's gone really weird in places... If you have GIMP or Photoshop, I recomend just copying the black lineart out of a clean version of the blank, and then pasting it in over the top as it's own later ;) This is acctually a trick I use all the time to keep my lineart clean. Some shading on the head and underside would be nice. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 16:42, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Here s the new version. I pasted the blank and it looks great. As for the shading, I did a bit on the muzzle, as well as the right foreleg. I personally am proud of the improvements. :D Kitsu, does it need a bit more shading in the "tummy" area? I was debating on that. F x  C  15:25, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

The blue eyes look extremely cloudy and dark. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="White" style="background:Black">39 15:45, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Well, I will lighten them up a bit, but I always envisioned Silver and Feather as having mysterious, hazy blue eyes a bit like Heathertail. F x  C  23:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

This looks pretty clase to approval, just alittle use of the lighten tool and it'll work. Good luck with Poppyfrost! Mallinois  The Doghouse  20:29, 13 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Use the lighten tool on the tail and a bit in the back, and try to even out the colors. Some places are light, and some are dark. --<font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mallinois <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">The Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked - Ui! 22:09, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

The Eye is... extremely dark. Lighten it up a bit!!! -- MU MB LE 785  20:49, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Doesn't she have long hair? And a river blue eye? ..::Applestar4904 16:19, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

I like it! But she looks to... misty? Like sort of hazy, and I think you might want to darken it a little bit. --Darkhallows 04:49, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

Actually, I think this looks fairly nice. Are there any other comments before this is approved? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 05:41, 19 April 2009 (UTC)


 * It looks good, except for that the ye looks black, and the blue needs to show in the eye. -- Mallinois Fluffy Power 20:07, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

The onlt thing I think needs doing before approval is to make the eye a slightly lighter blue so the colour can be seen. This is really good though FxC and should be approved soon --<font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">Sandy <font color="Yellow" style="background:Black">Leader's Den 17:12, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

Approving-the eyes are just fine. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 00:20, 1 May 2009 (UTC)