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Raggedstar (D) - For Approval
This is Raggedpelt, one of my favorite warriors, EVER! I think I did... ok. Bra mble  berry!  16:23, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Does this mean that you're withdrawing Boulder? Imagewise the hind foot closest to us needs to be colored. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:28, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

He needs a ripped ear--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     19:32, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Considering you've expressed the want to withdraw Boulder and do this image, I'll let this stay up and take over your Boulder image myself, because there are very minor changes needed and it can be approved. Although, you shouldn't waste your work. You're throwing away a perfectly good image just because you want to do another. -- Bramble 22:22, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble's right about that, silver. Anyway, for the image, I know that his leader image has green eyes, but in "Bluestar's Prophecy", it said he had yellow. Should this be changed now, or do we have to wait for the next tweak week? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:32, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Eye colour. If you can cite it then tell me and I'll quickly change the leader image. It won't take two minutes. ✐S aN  dY  08:51, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow! Sandy, you're awake? Its 4:55am here, I'm wide awake! Bra mble  berry!  08:56, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     18:27, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back ear, and darken the shading on the chest and belly just a little bit. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   13:36, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, about the citation. On page 163 of "Bluestar's Prophecy", it says here - A dark tabby tom, his yellow eyes blazing, was staring at Stormtail from among the ShadowClan warriors. It doesn't say that it was Raggedpelt, and over on page 166, it says - ''"Raggedpelt will take his place," Cedarstar went on. A dark brown warrior stalked from the crowd of ShadowClan cats into a pool of moonlight below the rock.'' Now, I know that it's possible those were two totally different cats, but I really think they were both Raggedpelt. I also looked in the allegiances, Raggedpelt is the only dark brown tabby in ShadowClan. (Featherstorm is brown tabby, but she's a queen. And Lizardfang is light brown tabby, but he's an elder) So, what do you guys think? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:53, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The chances that the cat on page 163 is not Raggedpelt are one in a million. Unless someone can find something saying he has green eyes, I think you should change his eyes you yellow. Also, the stripe on the top of his haunch and his belly look like they are one large triangle and it looks odd. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:36, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The tufts of fur on his hauch don't look like tufts of fur. Fix that. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  22:25, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ☮Silverthistle  Berrystumpytail, Ha!☮  15:02, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:34, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, I ah- never would have found it if it weren't for you, Nightshine! Also, aren't we allowed to have anouther image up for approval? Thats what I heard. ☮Silverthistle Berrystumpytail, Ha!☮  12:31, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Where'd you hear that? Only one image per person. Oh and, I found the citation ;) Blur the shading on his haunch more Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 16:46, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred haunch shading more. K! Got it, 17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 13:47, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

His belly is missing the raggedy-fur look Butterfly }  { Song!  19:28, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

No one has replied on this for quite a while, I'm getting conserned.... When will this get anouther suggestion? 17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 21:34, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Crystalpearl already comented. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 22:16, April 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * In addition to Crystalpearl's above comment about the raggedy fur, I would suggest you thicken and/or darken the shading as it is hard to see. ✐Sa  NdY  15:36, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐Sa NdY  17:14, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) - For Approval
i dont think any of my charcats are very good anymore...how's this? Pebble2Pineow 22:13, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is good or bad news but its his other leg that is deformed. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:16, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded i hope its this one Pebble2Pineow 22:47, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Layer a regular warrior blank over this; his leg wouldn't have been deformed while he was performing warrior duties, or at least it wasn't troubling him. Also, please put a link in your signature instead of just the text. I fixed the one above for you. -- Bramble 23:10, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded how's this?Pebble2Pineow 02:07, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart for the feet looks a little funny. Can you fix it? I can if you don't want to--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:34, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks a little... scratchy, as if the sharpen tool has been used in places. Run the blur tool over it a few times and also blend the ear pink. ✐S aN  dY  08:55, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

how's this?Pebble2Pineow 16:05, March 28, 2010 (UTC)


 * I believe while you shaded you went outside the lines as you can see white-gray streaks coming out near his tail. Erase these and the easiest way is to add a white background again to the image. Once done just make it transparent again.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:43, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be blurred and the line art around his hind leg still looks odd. It's too square. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:41, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

im not rlly sure how im goin to get the leg good nightshine? can you help me?Pebble2Pineow 16:01, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it for you :)--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     03:46, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

thanks night :D reuploaded Pebble2Pineow 02:02, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like on his lower haunch he has a smile face like :) that but facing the normal way. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

i cant really tell where that is can you circle it Minnow?Pebble2Pineow 21:10, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I circled the smile in red. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 00:13, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded this is gonna be the last image ill do for the PCA pebble2pineow 02:17, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks really good! Lighten his back right foot a tiny bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:45, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedpebble2pineow 18:33, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Nothing else seems to be wrong. Comments before approval? -- Bram ble  00:17, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

His hind paws seem to have light spots on them. Otherwise, I see nothing wrong. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:15, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Littlecloud (W) - For Approval
Well, here he is! Comments? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  15:23, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Add a couple of stripes to the head, and fill in the eye. :) -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   15:40, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Can you believe I didn't colour his eye? Well, added stripes and filled in eye. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  15:50, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest and head. Add stripes to the ear closest to us.-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  16:11, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the chest and head. Ears are now stripey. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  17:28, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think he should have a stripe on his neck/cheek area. It looks a little blank. Raven Randomness!  20:36, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added a stripe to his neck. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  15:58, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I got nothing M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:46, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the tail and don't blur them as much. This is great!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  21:58, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened tail stripes and didn't blur. It looks better. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  22:04, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing is to darken the stripes on the head. I don't see anything other than that :D!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  22:55, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened head stripes. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  11:20, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything. Does anyone have a say in this?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  19:42, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

His ear lineart seems blurred. Mo us et al on !  Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE!  16:48, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:21, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lol that's the stripes Mousey Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  12:02, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. PLEASE don't say to blur the stripes more. They will not! GRR! Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  21:28, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:10, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, do you have Littlecloud and Smudge up for approval?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:19, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, Nightshine's right. Bircy, you can't have two images up for approval at the same time. Littlecloud or Smudge, which will it be? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:00, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Umm.... Ugh I'll keep Littlecloud up. I think this one's closer to being approved and well. =/ Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  10:53, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be slightly darker and more visible, as Nightshine said. Other than that the image looks lovely. -- Bram ble  00:15, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Argh! Sorry I haven't loaded in a while I got tons of school homework for the holidays and I've been super busy! But I'm back now so yeah! Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  19:01, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The face looks too bare, maybe add a few more tabby stripes on the cheeck. Everything else looks great!!! :3 Dawnleaf 21:55, April 18, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Added a few stripes to the cheek. They're supposed to be harder to see too so. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  10:14, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Robinwing (TC) (W)-- For Approval
Here is Robinwing from ThunderClan. (This is the 34th post. there are 2 conversations) Comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  16:07, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  17:29, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading on the ear and legs that aren't facing us. If there is some there darken it. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:45, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are too small. Make them wider, and blur them Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:58, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did all the stuff above, now what else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  13:08, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are still kinda small. Spread them out a bit and blur them as well as the shading if you can. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:05, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Enlarged highlights and blurred shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  21:22, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the shading some more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     21:25, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred earpink and darkened shading. Anything else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:05, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ginger part a bit bigger? It seems a bit small. -- Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 23:05, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made ginger bigger. What else shall I change?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:45, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need alot of shading. Snowstorm!

How do I do that?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  11:44, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need to be expanded, they are far too concentrated. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  16:32, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this too expanded?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  18:02, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. The hind leg shading needs to be blended and blurred. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  19:43, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred hind leg shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:09, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry,I just woke up when I wrote that. The highlights need a lot of blurring, not shading. Sorry! Snowstorm!

You need to brighten the highlights and blur them. The shading also needs blurring. Ice Spring is here! 02:06, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Brightened and blurred highlights. Blurred shading. Anything else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:32, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the chest color well. Dark hallows 17:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened/darkened ginger patch (whichever one it looks like to you)-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  21:53, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:18, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  16:45, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Just brighten the ginger on her chest, and this should be ready Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:57, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is it ready?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  21:20, April 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * The highlights in the middle of her body and on her muzzle stand out too much; that is to say, the transition between the lighter colour and the base pelt colour needs to be made smoother. Also, the ear pink is too small and needs to be more trianular and central to the ear. ✐Sa  NdY  15:44, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:57, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Raggedpelt (W) - For Approval
This is my first try at doing a charart, so I'm sorry if it's really bad/if I did it wrong. How is it?Hollytail 00:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, first; the lineart is really strange, it's white, it should be black. Second, you need to save it in png format, not jpg. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

How do I fix the lineart? And could that have anything to do with the fact that I had issues with getting the blank onto pixlr?Hollytail 01:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did you delete the white inside the blank before you put the brown in? And what kind of trouble did you have? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Right-click->open in new tab for the image, and then you can edit it. The images in the gallery are shrunken a bit. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 01:25, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Over the area with the blanks it says to click to get the image at full size, but whenever I tried that, it wouldn't let me place it in pixlr, or save it to pictures. It came up in a box in the center of the screen and all that it would let me do was highlight it...Eventually I just used the thumbnail picture...Hollytail 01:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, you can't do that. Copy the file name of the blank and place it into the search bar. Then, go to the page and get the location, and you're good to go! Other than that, the image looks nothing like  Møųş  ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  01:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried fixing it in the right blank this time... How does it look now?Hollytail 02:30, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Use the color dropper to get the right coat color- he is still far too dark. And his stripes don't match the leader image. Don't worry, that problem is easy to fix. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  04:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Or use the sponge tool set to saturate on size 200 will do. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail 12:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still weird...Layer a regular warrior blank on the image. The shading needs more blurring and so does the stripes. And, the ear pink needs to be lighter. Ice Spring is here! 15:45, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Tried fixing it, but what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Why did you blur the ragged fur lines? Those should be solid! ☮Quail☮ Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 15:36, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, sorry... is this better? And what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:51, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

The eye doesn't look right...look at this or this to see how it should look.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:33, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is really blurred and there is some missing on the head and paws. Also darken and blur the shading. Add another stripe to the haunch and try making it more brown like his leader image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:39, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I can say this but; it's been 5 days since you've worked on this. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:50, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

You can say it but this user still has time as we wait a week. Sakura Kiss Haikage 17:54, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Eek, Sorry! I worked on it, but I didn't realize that I didn't re-upload it. Oops... Sorry! Anyway, better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The line art still needs to be fixed and his pelt should be a darker. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:55, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

What's wrong with the line art and how do I fix it?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the picture! LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:04, April 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * The lineart near his back ear is missing where it connects with his head. The lineart near his hind leg and tail are smudged too. you can see brown pixels. Just past a new lineart on top of it and clean it up some if there's extra sitting outside of it.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:45, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I would highly reccomend redoing this. LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 04:22, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I could try to fix the lineart for you if you'd like. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 19:58, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to redo it, how does it look now?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:32, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

The lineatr is good but im not sure what the dark brown smudges in his pelt are. Is it supposed to be shading? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:42, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think they are. Blur the shading, lengthen the stripes and make them less dark like the leader image, and make the ear pink more triangular. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:14, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

The large blob of shading in the middle of his haunch needs to go away. Perhaps you might want to check one of the tutorials? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:27, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes and blur the shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:32, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to fix it, how does it look now?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to lengthen the stripes. 雨 晶須  15:27, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * The colour is a little dark and there are more stripes needed in places. The ear pink is a little bright and/or needs blurring and the raggedy-fur lines look too... similar; as in they are all the same shape and size as each other. ✐Sa  NdY  17:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also, he needs a torn ear (unless he got that after he became deputy?) 雨  晶須  21:20, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 01:24, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (E)- For Approval
My first ever elder! I know it's bad. Comments? ♥ Willow  03:08, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So how do I make it not over the limit? ♥ Willow  03:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

You have to wait until some more images are approved. The limit is 35 chararts up for approval. I bet plenty will be approved by tomorrow and you can put this up :) -- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

K thanks you're really helpful :3 BTW, I like your new siggy! ♥ Willow  03:33, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! A senior warrior, Bramble or Sandy will decline this soon-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This can stay up Willowpool as it's now under 35 ✐Sa  NdY  16:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone? I haven't got any comments yet. It's not declined, is it? ♥ Willow  20:53, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

No, it isn't. My main comment is that the shading needs blending. ✐Sa NdY  21:03, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How is it now?

A lot better! Just darken and blur the shading and try to make the ear pink less purpley. You forgot to sign :3-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:27, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Purpley? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 01:18, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Purple. Make it more pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:30, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. XP I think it's the same! (Pulls hair) <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 01:37, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone?Doesn't it look like its smudged too much? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 03:48, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

It does look a little too smudged. Blur it together more and that will fix it.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:14, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

How about I make the pelt color darker like his deputy image? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:25, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Which is better, do you think? I know I post a ton but this is my 1st charart for approval so...<font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 23:47, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I would definately say to keep the second one. Blur the shading on it, and make the ear pink more of a reddish color like his deputy image Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:16, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded. Ok. I fixed the earpink and blurred it. How's it now? By the way, what's CBA? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 19:40, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

CBA means Comments Before Approval. But only the leader, deputy, and senior warriors can use it. Which excudes me! And about Cinderfur, the lineart on the tail looks thin. You should make it look normal, and blur the shading a bit more. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  21:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How's it now? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 16:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is it declined or approved?<font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 04:10, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more and darken the tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. blurred highlights and darkened the tail. Anything else?<font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:20, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a second here. I don't think Cinderfur was ever an elder. He died a deputy. *checks* Never mind. Sorry. But how could a deputy used to be an elder? LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 07:21, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

He was never really an elder. he was elder age but had to fend for himself under Brokenstar's rule. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 18:56, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

So what should I do? <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 04:00, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights just a little, because it's too bright now. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. darkened highlights. :<font color="aquamarine" style="background:White">Sky <font color="thistle" style="background:White">wish 23:25, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks a lot better! Just blur the highlights some more and it should be perfect-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:41, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''blurred highlights although for some reason it looks darker :<font color="aquamarine" style="background:White">Sky <font color="thistle" style="background:White">wish 00:04, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W) - For Approval


Right. So here it is,my first charart- I admit,its not perfect,is it? In fact I dont think she will be aproved. I will do a little more work on her if thats the case. So please comment and tell if Yellowfang (W) is good enough! -- Clar ris  sa! :)  08:21, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's good for a frist try :) try copying her MC image and then get the ear pink from that, and also shhe doesn't need ear pink on her back ear. Add eye color as well. Also try and make the scarrs more like they are on the MC image. And last of all, no need to put the image in a Thumb :) Shruggy talk 11:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It has to be full size, not thumbnail. That's also the (probably) the reason that the apprentice blanks show up blurry on pixlr. Click on them, then save to your computer. You might need to redo it, but maybe someone could resize it...? → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:34, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, other than that:

1.) The ear pink is far to bright. It should be a natural color- see Yellowfang

2.) The scars are unrealistic and do not match her med. cat image

3.) I don't see color in her eye. When you get the right blank, fill it in, using the tutorials for reference

4.) The shading is too concentrated, see the tutorials for different shading styles.

Other than that, waaaaaaaaaaaay better than my first failure attempt. Mo us et al on !  Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE!  11:46, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I will do that then. Thanks! And by the way,what tutorials should I use? Clar ris  sa! :)  12:00, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There are many tutorials to look at but you can look at them all to find the right style here. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  12:09, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried my best,second time round,what do you think}} -- Clar ris  sa! :)  08:10, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Remember, do not put it as a thumbnail when you put it on the page, make it full sized. I can't really see the ear pink21:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC) Mo    us    et    al    on    !!

The line art is a little blurred.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:31, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

So is it aproved? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:06, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Not quite yet. The lineart is a little blurred and needs fixing, and the shading needs blending more. ✐Sa NdY  17:24, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

To make the shading look neater and more like her medicine cat image, smudge the shading a little to give it that kind of texture. Right now it looks like a spotlight. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 21:50, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. No need to add the furry highlights I did.  Dark hallows 05:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried to blur the shading :P Does it look better? Clar ris  sa! :)  07:57, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still really blurry. Do you need help fixing it? And the eye colour doesn't look right either-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:03, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Im going to redo this.It looks really bad :P Clar  ris  sa! :)  08:38, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Millie (Lo) - For Approval


With four images going to be approved today, one withdrawn, and 7 not images, this will be the 35th. Not much to say other than that, I'm pretty happy on how she turned out. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:40, April 5, 2010 (UTC)I

It looks okay,but maybe you could blur it a little more? Other than that,much better than mine! Clar ris  sa! :)  14:57, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It doesn't look any different, but I blurred it as much as it will go without looking odd.-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 15:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes,its much better,I think it could be aproved now. Clar ris  sa! :)  15:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could lighten the ear pink a bit? Snickers 20  Click here! 15:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Minnow. :) All I see is just the shading could be blurred a tad more. Ice Spring is here! 15:43, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading so it's less visible. :) Fawnstorm  Never miss a beat..  16:50, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for all of your nice comments! It's good to know that after months of being away I haven't forgot anything. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 18:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Try making the stripes a bit darker and darken the ear pink a tad. Also make her tail tip gray.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:12, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

In the manga, her collar was on. Should we leave it as it is, or add a collar? Plus, the fur doesn't really match the color of all of her kittypet, warrior, and apprentice images. See Millie.-- ☮Quail☮ <font color="Maroon">Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 12:52, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I will do as Night shine said, and make two, one with and one without a collar and then put them both up. To Quail, the color can't really be helped because I used the eye dropper and these are the colors it gave me. Last I will get to this as soon as I can. It's almost ten and I still have to do my Latin homework. If I finish latin in time I will try to get it on, but I will get it up by tomorrow at the latest.-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:31, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened stripes, ear pink, noticed that I only needed one with a collar, added a collar (a bad one) anything I missed? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 22:03, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her kittypet image has a red collar. Can you make the line on the collar more stright. Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the collar color and I tried to make it as straight as I could. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:37, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Could you shade the collar? Compared to the rest of the image it looks flat and cartoony. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:46, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I personaly think every thing is good but the collar...its a little bit crooked and fat try making it more straight and more skinney....other wise i love itLionClaw132 19:24, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks great but the collar really isnt that nice,try getting it more skinny. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:41, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Why does she need a collar? The only time we ever see her as a loner is in the Lost Warrior Series, and she doesn't have a collar then (this is Nightfall, siggie is messed up at the moment)

Yeah, the designers sort of flunked that part of the manga. I agree with Nightfall; loners shouldn't have collars, in any case. When she showed up in the Clans, she didn't have one, and we tend to work more with the actual books then the manga. If you could take it out, that'd be great. -- Bram ble  00:36, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowclaw here! I am having problems with my computer so I can't get to the picture and I can't get on the computer very long so please wait until I can fix my computer.

Frostfur (Ki) - For approval
ok its my first charat ever. I know it's bad but still..... Comments? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  16:12, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but even with two discussions this is over the limit of 35. Just when I thought we had that problem sorted... Declining as I'm fed up with having to clean up the page already today. Please resubmit this when the page goes below 35 images. Thanks Snickers, and it's not just you so don't feel bad. ✐Sa NdY  16:19, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Its quite good but as Sandy said,below 35. Clar ris  sa! :)  17:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It might have changed since Sandy's comment but this is the 35th image. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So, is it ok? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  19:49, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's fine now. The background needs to be transparent, not black though. ✐Sa NdY  19:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded Better? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  20:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

wait. I have this reserved. Can't i do her? Echo Kit  21:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Echo your reservation is over two weeks old. Snickers has the right to do this image . Haikage Ash's Talk 21:23, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

oh... I was about to but her up but oh well. Echo Kit  21:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lining on the right ear is not there, and I can't see the highlights really well. What program did you use? ~Ec hos  tar  22:04, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is gaps in the line art in various places.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 22:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded crosses fingers Better?

It looks as if you're using paint to do this image. You need to use pixlr of some other image program. The shading needs to be blurred. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading more. Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  11:23, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

You are familiar with blurring, right? And some of the lineart was drawn over. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 22:53, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * It looks as if you tried to draw some of the lineart back...The ear pink needs to be blurred around the edges and this white is too bright so the shading won't show up as much and it'll make it harder. Look at her other images for reference:



To make it easier for you use the color droppler so you can take the base color from one of these images. Don't take the shading at all though and you are using pixlr right? Because it still looks as if you're using paint. If not there's always GIMP you can download :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  22:27, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I'm using pixlr. I'll work on it : ) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  22:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm on vacation and pixlr does not work. : ( I'll fix it when I go home. (which is in 2 days :) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  00:03, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded What! every time I try to change it on Pixlr it stays the same! = ( Snickers!  Meeow!  I am such a furball.  I ♥ the Warriors wiki!  22:17, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I sugust you redo it. The shading looks like you sprayed it on using Paint. You need to burn it on using the burn on pixlr. Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:20, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I'll redo it. I'll have it done soon. Silverstar

If you want, I can help you re-thicken the lineart. Otherwise, just do what everyone else said above. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:10, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Computer problems.... Getting it fixed tomorow. Right now I'm at the Library.*sigh* Sni  ck  ers  20:04, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid it so is it any better? Sni ck  ers  04:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still looks as if its painted on. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 04:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I promise by StarClan I was using pixlr Sni  ck  ers  04:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Im not saying that your not using pixlr. I'm saying that it looks like you're using the paintbrush instead of the burn tool. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 04:36, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry :S The burn was weelll kinda weird with me Sni  ck  ers  13:35, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

You seemed to have smudged part of the lineart, like near the forelegs. I can help you fix that if you want. 雨 晶須  15:26, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight Blank


For Briarlight's blank I am going to do a deformed warrior blank. I was wondering if I could have some help making it? Thanks. Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:43, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, of course I'll pitch in. Also, are we going to have her hind legs twisted backwards, or not? Cause she broke her backbone and can't move her hind legs. <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 14:17, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I thought her hind paws would be out behind her so it looks like she is dragging herself along. So her back legs are behind her, if you see what I mean? Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 14:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, here it is. I can't make the legs or paws look normal, though... <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 01:45, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Here is mine: -- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:16, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oooaaahhh! I like! But I think the hindlegs are too much like a teddy bears, thick and fluffy. Could you make them a bit thinner? Please? ;) <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 02:50, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I made them a bit thinner. But Fawnstorm can edit the blank the way she wants.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:01, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thank-you Night! Its ''amazing! ''I'll get to work on it right a way! Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:36, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

What about me! ):( <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 13:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yours too! For the base-line! Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 14:23, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tail she be down too. It doesn't look right to me for some reason with the legs down and the tail just sticking up. It looks funny.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  21:34, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Shimmerpool. If she cant move her legs she probably cant move her tail. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:45, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, because cat's tails are attatched to their spines Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, here she is. I made her tail thick, because she's swollen, remember? So are her hind legs, so it pretty much all fits together! <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 02:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think they meant the tail should be down, not up even more. I don't think it should be swollen either. I'm pretty sure the swelling went down by the time she earned her warrior name. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:05, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

k, what about her hindlegs then? They look swollen. I quit! ):( <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 23:27, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

No need to be throwing a fit about this now....I had this more in mind.
 * The tail could be edited if its too thick if you want. :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  00:47, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Here is the tail thinned out. I didn't add transparency because I was lazy-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:31, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Pretty good! Only thing is, perhaps leave a small gap in the line serperating her tail from her body, there should be a small indent in her leg where he foot ends, and, though this is minor and if it's too hard to do you don't have to, her front legs should be slanted a bit more outward, becuase it would be amazingly hard for her to hold hereslf up like that. I can draw you a diagram, if you want, and if the changes are too hard to make then don't worry about it; they're just suggestions. Nice job! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:00, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I put the current blank at the top of the section, and as soon as you think the blank is ready, Fawnstorm, post a message saying that the current version is fine and you've started. Then I can archive it. This is still seen as a discussion section, for those of you worried about the limit. -- Bramble 22:11, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

As Mossy said, this is pretty good, but the hind leg facing us looks kinda wierd. It all of a sudden goes down to the drooped position. Probably you'd want to make the top part more slanter, if that makes any sense. Also, the front legs are a little higher than her hind legs and tail, if you could make them more level, that would be good.

Yeah, I've seen a cat sit like they do in the warrior blanks, and the bump in the hind legs is their KNEE. I don't think Briarlight would be able to have her knees like that. Erase the hind leg bump and redo it so it looks like the back part of the hind legs. Butterfly } { Song!  19:28, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I usually only lurk, and don't participate... But due to the anatomy... The back is... weird... where the legs connect to it. If you look at a picture of a cat lying down the shape of the knee and hip changes. What your picture currently shows is a cat whose legs aren't being dragged behind... instead the knee is still folded into the sitting position with the heel and foot flopped out in a way that would indicate the leg is broken, not lifeless. Unfortunately more than just simple editing of the blank will do the trick for this one. Parts of the rear half need to be completely re-drawn, not just edited. A reference picture of a cat or dog sitting with the legs out behind would be helpful, methinks. I'll see if I can't stalk my spaniel and get something for you. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 22:07, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

The paws don't look....Natural. LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 08:12, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

That'd be great, Kitsu. Nightshine, when we get some sort of reference perhaps I can finish up editing this? It needs to get off the talk page and it's needed so Briarlight can be done soon. I'm not that bad at anatomy, as long as I do it on paper first. -- Bram ble  00:11, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, was I supposed to be fixing this up? Sorry. I'll get to work once I'm back from Hawaii. But, Bramble, you can edit this if you would like.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:33, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You should add some lineart around where the red line is. Sorry if I'm being a trouble or anything. <font face="Papyrus" color="#ffcc33">Raven <font face="Papyrus" color="#ff3366">Randomness!  22:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I added what Ravenflight put above. Diagrams are really helpful to explain changes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Hazeltail (A)-For Approval
I think she's number 35, but comments? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  10:33, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. And she needs ear pink. ✐Sa NdY  10:42, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added ear pink, (how could I have forgotten that!), and tried to blur the shading. I think that the ear pink needs to be less gray does anybody agree with me or have any suggestions? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  10:57, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink isn't gray, at all. You should make the ear pink brighter. <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 13:51, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Hazeltail is the best :) Darken the shading a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   14:16, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Dang! I was gonna put my charart up for approval! Oh well. Image, blur the shading and highlights and lighten the earpink like silver said.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:43, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading, blurred shading, and brightened ear pink. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  20:21, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:58, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  22:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

The neck shading is still too sharp. Blur it over and over. also, blur her face patch, especially just underneath the ear. Rain whisker  武士貓  02:41, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I blurred the shading as much as possible and also blurred the patch on her face. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  10:51, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her midsection a little. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:31, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened the shading on her midsection. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  21:07, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  22:30, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐Sa NdY  17:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC)-For Approval
Here she is! Second sharpclaw! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, why am I so slow!? I really want to put my charart up! Image wise, this is good. Just blur the shading and highlights. Also, darken the earpink and make it smaller. But this is good.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:06, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Note: I am dping this while Briarlight is being worked on :) Blurred shading and made the Ear Pink darker and smaller. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:29, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading... Could you make it more noticeable??? I think you blurred it a little to much... Mo onp  elt   ۞  18:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about that Moonplet. :) I think I got over-excited. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:24, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Sakura Kiss Haikage 14:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Largened Ear Pink. Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:30, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Center it some more. Sakura Kiss Haikage 19:29, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Centered it. Sorry it took me so long, my laptop wouldn't let me upload it. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  09:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading more visiable;thefore, darken it. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:06, April 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * Yes, darken the shading and/or add some highlights. ✐Sa  NdY  17:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Halftail (W)- For approval


How is it?

Sorry this is over the limit; you forgot to sign-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:32, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

No this is within the limit. Darken the whole thing. Sakura Kiss Haikage 11:33, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Use a less saturated shade of brown like the one in his elder image. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 15:49, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Tabby stripes need to be blurred. Dawnleaf 18:37, April 10, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Shouldn't his tail be... in half? Also, the stripes seem too big.-- Dark hallows 19:52, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tail should be long since he retired after it was halved. I agree about the stripes though. Sakura Kiss Haikage 19:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Naw, he became an elder because he couldn't balance BECAUSE his tail was in half. They only began calling him Halftail when he became an elder. His warrior name was Sparrowpelt. Other wise, the stripes are a tad too wide and they need to be blurred. A LOT. Butterfly } { Song!  19:38, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this. It has been 5 days. ♥Snowstorm♥   Happy  Mot  her's   Day!01:54, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

A user has a week SnowStorm. ✐Sa NdY  15:00, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy *dips head in shame and foolishness* ♥Snowstorm♥   Happy  Mot  her's   Day!21:49, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, it's been a week. Please work on him or he will be declined

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 23:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)


 * Snowstorm: No worries ;) ✐Sa  NdY  13:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy. Yes, Nightfall is right.S N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 02:21, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (Ki)- For Approval
Not much to say about it.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 18:41, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the Ear Pink more visible. Blur the shadin and lighten the nose pink. This is really good. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:45, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 19:10, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some highlights on his chest and forehead? They're optional, of course. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 19:15, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'd darken the ear pink a tad more. Mo onp  elt   ۞  20:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened earpink. I would add highlights, but I don't know how to and all of the tutorials confuse me. If anyone can help, please!=)<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 21:58, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I addd the highlights for you :3. kü§ Ån  Ågï  22:23, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Anymore comments?<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 22:31, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken his shading and blur it. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 23:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean thicken it?<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 23:14, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

It means to make it wider, or thicker, ect. kü§ Ån  Ågï  23:19, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

When I tried to do it, it looked very weird. Anything else? Oh, and I also blurred the shading ;)<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 17:41, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little. Sakura Kiss Haikage 23:05, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened the shading but I think I darkened to much so I put 2 up. I first one is the original and the second one is the one I darkened the shading. What do you think?<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 00:51, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Tkey both look the same. I think the shading color is fine just blur it. Sakura Kiss Haikage 10:36, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred shading. Better? I hope this gets approved soon!<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 00:48, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  01:16, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined earpink<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 00:46, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone? I know it hasn't been 5 days, but I am bored XPS N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 04:44, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink. Save one of Sootfur's current images and use the eye dropper on the earpink.-- Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip 12:18, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got it straight from the warrior image.S N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 14:54, April 17, 2010 (UTC)


 * Add some shading under the chin. ✐Sa  NdY  17:35, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Stormfur (Lo) - For Approval
I'll archive my withdrawn Goldenflower apprentice image later when everyone's been able to see it, so this is still within the limit. Not much to say, comments and suggestions? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  16:01, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit darker, the base seems to be more a medium grey than a dark one. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 17:12, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. The highlights look, dull, can you brighten them? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:15, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  21:05, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on his midsection looks a bit odd, as he wouldn't have a circular bump there like his shoulder. Perhaps make it a bit wider, following the shape of his body?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 22:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make it more like the shading style that I used on Lichen, with only the two highlights? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  19:56, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if this is any better or not, but I've tried to fix the highlights... ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  22:16, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Much better, just blur them a tad more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 13:58, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It didn't blur much more... ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  21:53, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Broken Shadow (SC) For Approval
I know I'm one over the limit, but Smudge is going to be declined and archived later. So how is she? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:18, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is good nightfall! All I have to say is blur the highlights, darken the earpink a bit, and blur the transition between the orange and white on the paws. Awesome job!<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 19:28, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Aww! I was going to say earpink but anyway, yes, earpink and blur where ginger meets white a little bit. Otherwise I love it! <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 19:36, April 11, 2010 (UTC)\

Amazing job. Darken the ear pink, blur the paws, and the shading and highlights. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:43, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks, guys :D Okay, I blurred the shading, highlights, and the white paws. I wasn't sure about the war pink though, (ear pink is so hard to do on ginger cats) so I made another version. On the first one, I haven't changed the ear pink color at all. The second one has darkened ear pink. Which one do you think I should go with? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:01, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say second. But earpink is still barely visible :X yeah, and ginger does look hard to do. <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 20:06, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is within the limit now, but Nightfall, please try to stay in it next time. You'll eventually get it in. In the meantime, good job on Broken Shadow. I think that the first ear pink look the best and the most visible. I don't see anything else wrong. -- Bram ble  22:39, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, did you reserve this before I did? I feel so stupid. 75.66.242.14 00:45, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I feel even stupider. I wasn't logged in, and I also reserved her after you, I think. :P  Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   22:36, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, don't feel stupid Mousey :) I'm sure a lot of us have done the same thing XD Okay, so I've got one vote for the first image, and one vote for the second image. Anyone else? Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 06:51, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Try a compromised happy medium. Saturate the first's ear pink more, but don't darken it. Not to insult your intelligence, but just in case saturation means to make it brighter and a little more juicier. There should be a saturation tool; I think it appears as a sponge. -- Bram ble  00:30, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lol, Bramble. Yeah, I know how to saturate :) Does it look any better? Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 02:34, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well, good, just making sure. ;) Yes, it does look better. Any other comments before the 24 hour call? -- Bram ble  02:55, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) For Approval


Okay, I redid the image of Poppydawn, because the Lineart was hardly visable, and there was no eye color. Comments? ♥Poppy Storm♥  20:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

The coat color looks too brown compared to the rest of her images. Make it more reddish. Φτ ε  ρό 20:32, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

On it! ♥Poppy Storm♥  20:50, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Better. But she doesn't look red-brown, she just looks brown. Make her more of a reddish color Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:55, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll redo her again. (Be right back, working on picture) ♥Poppy  Storm♥  23:17, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, redone. What'cha guys think now? :D ♥Poppy  Storm♥  01:11, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest saving one of her other images and using the color dropper tool to get the right color. Sakura Kiss Haikage 01:17, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Theres...No eye color.... Φτ ε  ρό 01:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

At Ashshadow ~ I did use that. I decided to use the Color Dropper so the colors would match. Should I try again?

At Φτ  ε  ρό  ~ Oops, lemme fix that. Be right back. :P ♥Poppy  Storm♥  01:42, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Fixed. Comments? ♥Poppy Storm♥  01:44, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little and blur it. Sakura Kiss Haikage 01:49, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a little and make the shading a little bit darker. Clar ris  sa! :)  12:09, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur her stripes more, along with what Ash said. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:14, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and darken it.S N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 01:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add eye coloring. <font face="Papyrus" color="#ffcc33">Raven <font face="Papyrus" color="#ff3366">Randomness!  04:32, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

For the eyes, I suggest using Icy's tutorial. 雨 晶須  21:19, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Clovertail (W) - For Approval
Here is Clovertail as a warrior, since her kits were made apprentices just before Firestar and Sandstorm left in Firestar's Quest. Comments/Criticism? -- Rain whisker  武士貓  21:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh! I likes! But the white-meets-brown place near the chest looks...awkward. <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 23:11, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's the same as her queen image:  Rain  whisker  武士貓  00:05, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, this looks good to me. The only thing I see is maybe blur the ear pink

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 01:45, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, blur and brighten the highlights, and lighten his haunch shading. It looks a little too dark. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 02:20, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and brighten the shoulder highlight so it matches the haunch hightlight. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Any better? 雨 晶須  17:39, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) - For Approval


Hi everybody, I'm new, so if this fails, that's my excuse. :-D <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 22:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I un-thu

mbed it so I could see it better. I suggest looking at the tutorials for the charart--you can find a link to them on the main page. They'll tell you how to shade, highlight, and detail correctly. I myself normally use Icythroat's tutorial.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">S

<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">haf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  00:38, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I've kinda skimmed a little, but I'll look through them thouroghly. Thanks! <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 00:59, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

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Needs pupil,blur shading and spots and blur ear pink. Good job though.=) Silverstar

Can I join the project? Though I can't post much images. I'll try to post tons though.

-Sagestorm70

This is good! Just....

1.Go to take the burn tool and put it around the body,

2. Dodge tool at hardness 20 and put highlights, and;

3. Fix the eye. LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 05:15, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely re-did it. <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 21:07, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

If light is coming from the top (which would result in shadows on

the bottom of the image) you dont need shading there. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 19:54, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Removed upper shading, added more flecks because the back looked to plain. Also, I accidentally moved it and couldn't get it back to normal without messing up the chat area. Go me. -_- <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 01:42, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 02:19, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading more. <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 19:39, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge (KP) - For Approval
First two colored cat, first black and white. I've been looking through a whole lotta tutorials. With Weaselfur (A) for Withdrawl, this is the 35th. Comments?-- ☮Quail☮ <font color="Maroon">Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 04:32, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I didn't like it at all.-- LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 05:45, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a bit thin, isn't it? Perseus | Perseus ,  Thou art not the hero | Thou art not the hero  11:26, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

There is not supposed to be earpink on the right ear. Also, blur the earpink ALOT. But good job!<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:41, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a little cross-eyed... <font face="Papyrus" color="#ffcc33">Raven <font face="Papyrus" color="#ff3366">Randomness!  23:12, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I blurred a little more, and did all above. Anymore Comments?-- LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 04:11, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Found a dead pixel. X(-- LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 04:16, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the bottom of the ear pink a little. ☺☻B-Day Weekend!!☺☻  21:49, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I blurred as far as it would go.-- LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 06:05, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches a lot more, and the shading on the face. For this I recomend using the round tool (not the one with the fuzzy edges) at size nine

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 20:42, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Comments?-- LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 06:05, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is really awesome. Just shade in the leg that's not facing us. Do you see it?-- Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip 12:21, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED.-- Quailflight 14:11, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

His black patches are a bit too dark. Lighten them up a little. Also, darken the bottom of the hind leg that's facing us (his right leg) 雨  晶須  17:42, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) - For Approval
Spottedleaf as an apprentice. Comments? → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:26, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Her shading needs to be blurred more, and her patches aren't blurred evenly. Can you blur them evenly together? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 11:53, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Maplefern I have this reserved. Mo onp  elt   ۞  13:06, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm almost positive that Maple had this first. I checked the history of the page and she recently renewed the date. You can talk to her about it on her talk page if you really want to do this image but not here. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:25, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I've hd this reserved since March 14 and recently renewed the date. → •Maple  fern•  ←  10:35, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

There is 3 stripes on the leg that is facing us that need a whole lot of blurring. Also, the tail stripes need a lot of blurring too.-- Snowstorm   Happy  Mot  her's   Day! 22:53, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ok... I'm sorry. Otherwise the image. The color is so off from the medicine cat image and all the others are darker! So darken it. And like the others said blur the stripes. Bur npe  lt  04:23, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it....two hours ago. Fail. → •Maple  fern•  ←  18:35, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? → •Maple  fern•  ←  17:19, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The orange is a little too bright, make it more natural ginger. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 21:13, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (SC) For Approval
Whispering Breeze Sharp Claw! Also the light is very bright and hitting her back if you were wondering. Constructments??? (This is under the limit because the Brairlight image is there) Mo onp  elt   ۞  13:28, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe it's the shading but to me she looks more pale gray than silver gray. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:27, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Constructments? Mo onp  elt   ۞  03:13, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the pink al little bit you can barly see it! but other wise i absalutly love it!

Reuploaded Please remember to sign your post with four tildes (~). Thanks and Constructments? Bur npe  lt   ۞  04:23, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Molekit - For Approval
nothing much more then awfull.....anything to say?(i tryed to take out the black)LionClaw132 23:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's way too big and stretched out, plus there's an extra square of white around the actual image. You'll need to redo it with this image: File:KitShortMa.png. Save that to your computer, edit it again and then reupload on the file name 'Molekit', please. He's not a warrior yet. Also, you'll need eye color, a less purple ear pink and some shading. You can look at some tutorials if you need help with the shading aspect. -- Bram ble  19:45, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Whoever left the previous comment you forgot to sign. Lion (if you dont mind if I call you that) You need to leave an image on the page even if you're fixing it. It might be mistaken as a discussion otherwise. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 18:36, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You're right, Ash; I did forget to sign. Fail on my part. :) And the post above is correct, Lion; you have to post an image soon, or this will be declined and archived. Please upload something in the next 24 hours. -- Bram ble  19:45, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Acorntail (W) - For Approval
Okay, so he was cited as a tabby and I wanted to attempt a new (for me) style so I decided to do him despite the fact we don't know his pelt colour. I just assumed it to be brown. Constructments? ✐Sa NdY  11:06, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty....Make ear pink smaller andpinker. :3 Did it say what colour his eyes where ? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:58, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

No, because 1) the image is in black and white and 2) his eyes are closed in the image ;) I would say to lighten it some, though. Even though the image is in black and white, it looks light colored

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 18:10, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ✐Sa NdY  21:55, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Just so you know, Sand, I changed the file name; you had an extra .png in there. :) The new shading style is lovely. The only thing I see is that the ear pink seems to be trailing downward slightly outside the ear. Other than that, Acorntail's a handsome kitty. -- Bram ble  02:48, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome. I love the tabby stripes. But, the earpink seems a bit bright and goes off of the ear a bit. Can you fix that? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:43, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for that Bramble, I don't know quite why that happened but I guess I didn't check it properly before I uploaded it... ✐Sa NdY  13:27, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur(A) - For Approval
My second up for approval. She turned out alot better than Quince. How is she?-- Earth A Legend In Her Own Mind...  20:16, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Very good. Just add an earpink and darken the shading a tiny bit. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 20:21, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: This good?-- Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip 20:57, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah,its great,just darken the ear pink a little. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 11:06, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else?-- Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip 12:14, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

No..It's Really good! <span style="color:Saffron;Font-family:AR Cena;text shadow: 0.5em,0.5em 0.13em">Sni <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:AR Cena;text shadow:0.5em,0.13em">ck <span style="color:Silver;Font-family:AR Cena;Text shadow:0.5em,0.5em,0.13em">ers 14:01, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks fushcia and there is no shading on the forearm facing us. → •Maple  fern•  ←  17:42, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is it ready?-- Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip 19:41, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall - For Approval
Okay, with one disscussion, and one being withdrawn, this is the 33th, or 34th. I don't know how to do math. =/ lol, anyways, construcments? (I cannot blur the shading anymore) -- Ice The stars will light your path... 21:45, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

The front paw facing us should be brown and the back paw facing us should be white. This is very good. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 21:51, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Ash! Much better than Crookedjaw. *grins* -- Ice The stars will light your path... 00:48, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really impressed with this, Ice. You've really worked on improving your technique and the image is beautiful. The only thing I see needing fixed is that highlight transition with the shading near the shoulder area needs to be blurred; you can see it's rather hard. -- Bram ble  03:15, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't the ginger have stripes?-- Dark hallows 07:13, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble. Shady, I didn't add stripes because I copied the apprentice image, and the apprentice image didn't have stripes. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:56, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

By far this is the best image you've done- in my opinion. The white on her muzzle just needs a tiny bit of blurring, however. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:25, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Mouse. Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:29, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, OK. I was going by the kit image, which shows both sides.-- Dark hallows 18:50, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything else wrong. As it's a little early, are there any other comments before the 24 hour call? -- Bram ble  19:43, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

One thing: I think the earpink is to light. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:09, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I copied it from her warrior image. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 13:55, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

You don't have to copy it. And I think you mean from her apprentice image. → •Maple  fern•  ←  14:02, April 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * fail Ice* yeah, I meant her apprentice image. Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:13, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Bumblestripe(W) - For Approval
Hey everyone! I'm just going to post Bumblestripe now but I won't be able to edit him until next Sunday because I am not at my laptop. Please comment in the meantime!-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Perhaps make the ear pink a little bigger? LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 06:36, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur stripes more Sni  ck  ers  20:00, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink bigger and blurred stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:02, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (Ki) - For Approval
Icecloud as a kit. Comments? Φτερ όaερ  άκι  11:43, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Its nice,darken the ear pink a little,maybe you could blur it aswell. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 14:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job! Make the earpink a tiny bit smallerS N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 14:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Φτερ όaερ  άκι  14:58, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading, and blur the shading you have. It's otherwise great! Butterfly } { Song!  14:31, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink just a little. 雨 晶須  15:23, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Φτερ όaερ  άκι  16:05, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Featherstar-For Approval
I always wanted to do Featherstar :). Which is better? The smudgy patches or the blurry patches? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 13:28, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

its a very good charart,but theres no Featherstar is the warrior series(correct me if i'm wrong,i might not have read the book she was in but i didnt see he on the availible charart lists) and why are there two of her? <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 13:35, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

There is a Featherstar, all you have to do is click on her name and it will take you to her page. Maybe you just didnt fully read my comment in which the reason why there are two is explained. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 14:06, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

OMG! I think its because i never got cats of the clans. Anyway,I think the first one is the nicest,of the two,is it the smudgy patches? but wait unil other users comment,and then choose. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 14:11, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Featherstar is in Code of the Clans. And as for the image, I like the blurred patches better. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   16:19, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I like the blurred patches better. The patch under his chin (blurred patches) needs some blurring. Also, the ear pink could be darkened. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:30, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The blurred patched one was seems to be most popular. Zoe: the one you liked was blurred. Ice: I'll fix the earpink but do you mean on both ears or just the white one? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 18:30, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah,I havent got cats of the clans or code of the clans. Anyway maybe you could darken the ear pink a little. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 13:45, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Both ears. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 13:56, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows this? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 14:07, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Is she supposed to be longhaired? Her article description used to say she had a feathery tail.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   16:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I just checked the book, and it doesn't say anything about her having a feathery tail. I might be wrong though. 雨 晶須  17:31, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I took that part out when I cited her description.

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 20:37, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Brightwhisker (L)- For Approval
Well, I really liked her in CoTC, but I was sad when she died. She was, however, leader for a time, even though she never got her name. So, comments? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   16:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I guess she was technically leader. I think there should be some white on the haunch in full view. There are also two white pixels by the tail that should be brown. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 18:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''What exactly do you mean by that, Ash? I also added shading, which I didn't do before. *face palm*  Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   23:41, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

All I meant was that there is white on her haunch on her deputy image but none here. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 01:54, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks amazing! Just do what Ash said, and shrink and darken the ear pink. 雨 晶須  15:18, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I didn't change the ear because that's how I do leader ears- it's on other leader images, and I got the color from her deputy image. Should I still change it? And I cannot believe I forgot the white on the haunch! I feel so stupid! I'm just not on it this week! Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

No, I don't think you need to darken the ear pink anymore, since you took the color from her deputy image. I think the shading on the bottom of the tail (the white part) could be darkened some, but that's about it. 雨 晶須  17:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also shorten the white on her tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   19:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Russetfur (W)- For Approval
Here she is finally! She is my second attempt, so please be considerate. Questions? Comments? Concerns? ~Ec hos  tar  19:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights need A LOT of blurringS N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 19:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add an earpink. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:41, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can Barely see shading Sni  ck  ers  19:58, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to blur shading and brighten the highlights. a lot. <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:23, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) Up for approval
Well, here he is! Open for comments now. Butterfly } { Song!  13:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The image is a redlink at present. ✐Sa NdY  13:48, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I KNOW. I can't open the file! I'll try again. Please wait Butterfly }  { Song!  14:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Butterfly } { Song!  14:29, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  14:49, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

In the future, don't use caps, because it's like shouting. I do see the eye color, just that the highlight in the eye seems a bit big. Also, blur the stripes and shading on the tail. -- 雨 晶須  15:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Needs eye colour! :3 Dawnleaf 14:45, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Redscar (MC) - For Approval
Redscar... Not exactly a name that fits a medicine cat. Constructments? -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 19:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks amazing. Darken the tail stripes and lighten the ear pink a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   19:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the haunch stripes a little bit. Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  19:37, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I think all of the stripes could be a little bit darker. This is an awesome image! Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 21:03, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, guys:) Lightened ear pink and darkened and blurred stripes. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö        22:11, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Just add some small stripes to the muzzle. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:52, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (A) up for approval
Decided I should do an easier one ;) Here is Cloudpelt as an Apprentice!!Dawnleaf 02:35, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Darken the shading more and put the earpink more in the middle of the ear. Also, add shading to the head. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:51, April 19, 2010 (UTC)