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Shellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
How do you charart. . . lol. I'm aware the shading needs smoothing out, but I'll fix it later.

re-up I tried.

Smooth out the head shading, define the tail shading, and add some lighting to --> front leg and paw. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:14, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I'll try to see what I can do for --> leg and paw shading. (yeah this is why kit shading sucks)

That looks better. :) Smooth out the shading on the forehead, and define the tail shading. Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 16:18, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Can you define the light on the tail?

Dovewing (Q) - For Approval
I'm proud with this! 00:47, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste outside of the <- side of the tail, and I believe the shading is leaking on the belly. Also, could you smooth out the shading? 00:57, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's also leaking on the tail, and can you define the shading on all legs?

Reuploaded The shading isn't leaking, it's just the pale parts. 01:29, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

the tint looks a bit too neon, and the shading is a bit flat. 01:30, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:00, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

still looks too neon, so maybe darken the tint 02:18, 9/05/2017

Looks nice! maybe define the shading depth and smooth it out a little? 03:39, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking on the belly. 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

This looks really pretty! Maybe define the eye depth?

Smooth out the shading on the front left (our left) leg, and define/darken the shading on the face? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:15, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Patch and Snek! :P 23:28, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the shading tint is too pink or something in my opinion. Maybe desaturate it a bit or make it more to the less neon side? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:07, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:47, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading a little bit? I'm having a little trouble seeing it. 21:45, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:15, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Star) - CBA
Hopefully this new cord I'm getting for my tablet helps until my new one comes. This was fun to do. Although I know the smudging is weird. I'll fix that as soon as I have a functional tablet (RIP 6 year old one) 01:21 Tue Sep 5

Define the shading on the front legs? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:36, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

the stripes look too dark. they're just the same colour as the pely, set on mutiply. the paleparts on the tail should also take up much more. 18:51, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Recede/smooth out the shading a little bit on the right side of the belly? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:19, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:56 Thu Sep 7

CBA?

Crowfeather (De) ~ For Approval
Wow.. bad dad is deputy. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

define the texture 04:36, 9/05/2017

Re-uploaded. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:41, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe make the pale parts look more... idk,, they look as if they're made with chalk on the other images, i guess? Make them rougher maybe?? If anyone else could throw in their opinion or reword what I said, that'd be great.

It might just be my laptop but maybe blur the shading on the muzzle? And perhaps tone down the tint a bit?

The shading on the belly looks lighter than on other parts of the body, maybe darken/define it a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:24, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope I got everything you guys says. The shading on the belly was the same as the chest n other parts. Hope it's okay now. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:42, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

i can rant on for days about this piece of -censored- being the deputy, but anyways, would you like the file for the warrior/kit?

Sure! Send it to cometandcosmo@yahoo.com. Thanks! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 16:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Was there something anything else wrong with this? Is the texture not hard-edged still or anything? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:16, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

I think the facial texture is... for a lack of a better explanation, too smooth and bright. Try "breaking" it up more. Also I sent you the file.

Re-uploaded. It looked bright because of not having shading around it and the other pale parts have shading on them. I redid the texture and tried following how you did it. I still failed... <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 05:52, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

He looks a little too bright atm, it's possible that my file is somewhat outdated. Try color picking the base from the loner. If that doesn't work try thickening the texture. I used a 1px paintbrush and drew lines as texture.

Ant (Lo) ~ For Approval
17:28, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

This is really, really great Sziri! Define the light on the head and define ear pink? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:08, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Aww,thanks 16:32, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Forgot the cheek-scars 12:51, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

he looks a little orange to me

Re-ups I hope its better now 14:22, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Fuzzball (KP) - CBA
FUZZBALL

smooth out the shading on the head 20:41, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dunno if that made a difference - there's ginger on the top of the head that makes it look a lot sharper than it is.

does he have a special collar that isn't listed on his page? because I don't think we can just alter lineart like that. 08:48, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

agreeing with skt. unless theyre cited with a special collar, lineart editing is not allowed. <span style="">22:03, 9/07/2017

Reuploaded Sorry about that; I suppose I envisioned him with a bowtie. I was going to upload after just skt had commented, but schoolwork got me busy

personally I liked the bowtie but ;~; maybe define the depth on the back and tail just a bit ? 09:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA?

Floyd (Ro) - CBA
I forgot to add the mange to his pelt, and I'm probably gonna tweak the shading a fair bit on the next upload, but oh well. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:40, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

does he have eyelashes? <span style="">01:45, 9/07/2017

Define all leg shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:14, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be a patch of brown that is darker than the rest by the shoulder. 21:53, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

p sure thats shading <span style="">22:02, 9/07/2017

Reuploaded. Yeah, it's just shading on the shoulder that makes that bit of fur look darker. I added mange, changed the eyes to amber (I meant to change them, they were only green 'cause I was using my old file for Dawn Mist's rogue image, which was also why there were eyelashes, which I've now removed), and defined the leg shading. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:10, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

did ya forget the mange? 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Lightkit (Kt) ~ For Approval
I made Tigerstar's (her grandrandfather) color and Tigerclaw's (her father) stripes (+ eyes).

This looks great! Define ear pink a bit?

Reuploaded

Reuploaded

This is really pretty! There's an unfilled pixel on the lower ---> haunch fluff right above the back paw. 01:32, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Tuna (Ro) - For Approval
Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading <span style="">21:36, 9/07/2017

Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading

Renamed.

Define the shading a bit on the front leg furthest from us, and the light on the front leg closest to us. 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

think you can make the shading by the hind leg curve a bit? it looks add cutting right across the thigh. 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Try and curve the haunch shading more - still looks the same in cutting across the haunch. I also think that the light needs to be defined on the the < side of the cat, and definitely expanded on the face.

Blaze (Ki) ~ For Approval
Whoa, sorry for disappearing. School started up and I became busy. Here's Blaze. Not too pleased with his stripes. 01:29, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

could you lighten up the shading just a tick? 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Hm, I think if Vec smooths out the shading a bit, she might not have to lighten the shading...

Reups Doesn't look like much of a difference on these tiny blanks, but I can lighten it if it's still too dark. 02:01, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

i think the shading is still too dark. also, try and make the stripes curve more, they look like straight lines across the blank.

Reups 21:15, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Peanut (Q) ~ For Approval
In the midst of the chaos of junior year, have another fat cat from yours truly

also I'll remove the scars later, this was one of my many OC images

Re-uploaded there

Did you colorpick from an actual peanut? cause that's what the lighter color looks like omg. Also, could you define the shading/light on <-- back leg?

Re-uploaded lol I didn't color pick. Anyways hopefully this is any different.

Pouncekit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 10:57, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Tone down the tint on the shading a little bit?(sobs I was gonna grab this one)

What do you mean, tone down the tint? The shading is black. Do you mean lighten it? 14:04, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah sorry that's what i meant. I just woke up and im not making much sense.

Hm, I think if she lightens it, especially given how the texture hides some of the shading, it might not be a good idea. That being said, could you define the light on both front legs?

Reuploaded. 14:16, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Growler (Ro) - For Approval
Gonna tweak that tail pattern later on so the tail doesn't look so gray...

Smooth out the patches a bit; they seem a tad hard-edged. 15:17, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

The effect was intentional. The patches on Jayie's image above has the patches at just about the same roughness as mine. Snookthorn also has some pretty hard-edged patches as well.

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Did some stuff.

dang it i was gonna grab this one, welp, can you define the shading on the front leg closest to us? 20:43, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like this one better.

Ajax (KP) - For Approval
ahaha i might lighten the shading... 17:07, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you? He looks tri-colored and I was really confused as to his pelt color for a minute...

Re-uploaded. i lightened it, and changed the tint. i might redo it. I also tried putting little dinosaurs on his color, but idk if you can tell what they are. 20:17, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

he looks a little gray right now, mind lightening him up a bit?

Re-uploaded. i couldn't get it too look right so i went ahead an redid it. 13:52, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Berryheart (Lo) ~ For Approval
First image as a warrior! :D Also, you gotta love this girl. <3 19:51, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

I think, with this source, most of the chest should be in shading. It looks like the light is like from above and hitting < way, so there would be at least some. Also, can you add a little shading to the > ear? Just a little bit to make it less flat-ish :)

Reuploaded 21:47, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

are the eyes filled in? <span style="">22:00, 9/08/2017

yes, her eyes are a dark blue, thats why they look like that. 22:01, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Streak (Ro) ~ For Approval
You could imagine how sick I was of smudging the shading after I finished it. 21:31, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps curve the facial shading a little to match the curvature of the face, and define the tail shading :) And maybe define the light on the < front leg as well. Looks nice!

Reuploaded Darkened the shading, so maybe that made a difference in defining the tail shading. 02:03, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Spiresight (Lo) ~ For Approval
i have two different monitors and they are showing me two different colours >:( 21:35, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

I'll lighten the back on the tail in a bit,,, if you dont agree just tell me skeet 21:43, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

The color looks right to me, Bramble. I think you're good how you have it.

re-up dunno if the tail got lighter... 03:35, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Rose (TS) (KP) - For Approval
I really like how this turned out :>

This is gorgeous, Danny! :D Smooth out the shading just a bit on the haunch and shoulder? 23:32, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define facial shading? (ermahgahsh this is amazing what's your secret)

reups Thank you!! my secret is not having a life (purchasable for 99 cents)

Diesel (kp) ~ For Approval
just realized how much waste there was on this. will fix it soon. <span style="">05:31, 9/09/2017

The stripes need to be black.

re-uploaded for waste. and @snowed, they are black <span style="">05:34, 9/09/2017

Are they pure black? Because that's what he's shown with. this base color also seems a tad bit darker than what his pelt should be.

theyre a tad lighter than pure black. <span style="">05:40, 9/09/2017

They need to be pure black, though.

re-uploaded <span style="">05:59, 9/09/2017

Lighten the base just a little bit. What you're colorpicking from is a tad bit darkened due to the lighting in my bedroom. I get you colorpicked, but that won't get you the appropriate coloring in this case. I'm the one that took the picture you're using. The lighting is awful. Try using about #e6d385 and see what you get. He's meant to be a brighter yellow, and this is more brown.

re-uploaded. <span style="">07:02, 9/09/2017

extend the stripes onto the <--- haunch

Can you taper the stripes a bit? In the colored version, the stripes appear more pointy-ended. 14:02, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Pigeonkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Prob gonna edit the shading and add texture but I'm just gonna post this now