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Minnowtail (Alt. A2) ~ On Hold
I think I made her too dark >m< I shall fix that.... Anywho, she was described with a dappled pelt~ Comments? 23:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, especially on the back ear. I love it! 8DDD 23:17, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes arent showing :c 00:08, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the nosepink. Looks pretty! 8D 08:13, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the face just a tad. Nice job, Fallow. 11:15, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Fallow! C: Define the earpink. 14:47, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks everyone ^^ 16:58, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the belly a tiny bit? :3 04:14, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face, too. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  11:23, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 16:27, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? :3 14:46, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is great and all, but who says that was a mistake? It was never stated otherwise, she could very well be a dappled dark gray cat.... 23:21, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I was thinking, I think that since she was only mentioned once it would be an alt but I think that this should be the main apprentice image and the warrior should be changed. 23:27 Sun Mar 25

Paleclaw's right. We're already having a discussion about partial-description alts, and this would be partial. She already is gray, in this image, just mentioned with dapples. All cats have some kind of pelt pattern, for what I know, but it just may not be visible. Plus, dapples don't make much of a difference, sorry. 23:34, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come cats like Lilystem get an alt. for being described as a tabby? I think this should stay. 01:53, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps Lilystem should be tweaked to a tabby then. Either way, I thought we decided something about what gets alts and what gets added? Didn't we decide that if it's completely plausible then it'd be added? I can't quite remember, but I thought that's what we worked out. Meaning this alt should be declined and all her images tweaked. 00:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Isn 't this sirt of assuming her description? We don't know for sure that she's actually a dappled cat, and it could very well be a mistake. But in any case, if this goes ahead, cats like Mudclaw would have to be tweaked too, and it seemd really unecessary. *Bad at making points* Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 00:07, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Skt's right. This is assuming descriptions, something we don't do here. If we don't assume with genders and eyelashes in the manga, then why are we assuming descriptions? I say we keep it, and if we find out later that she dappled, then we can delete this and tweak the others. It's not partial, honestly. We know she's gray. For all we know, the dappled coat could be an error. 06:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I've decided to place this image on hold until a final decision can be made. This is not to be declined, approved or archived until said decision is reached. 07:05, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

-didn't notice Misty left a comment- Should I reupload or wait until we figure out what we're doing with her? 13:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploading. Cloudeh told me to start up the discussion so... I think this should stay an alt. It was the only time she was described with it, and she has never been described with dapples in the alligiances. 18:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think she meant start it on the talk page. XD But really, since when do we not add descriptions purely cause they were only mentioned once? If we did that, Spottedleaf wouldn't have half her description, Firestar wouldn't have a pale belly, Brindleface wouldn't be mottled, so and and so forth. We shouldn't assume it's wrong just cause it was only mentioned once. 08:44, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (MC Alt) - CBA
Hah it seems like forever since I've put anything up for approval! I kept meaning to do this but kept forgetting. He is constantly called mottled gray in the allegiances, and I don't think it's a partial description because he is gray-brown with white splotches, so I think it warrants an alt. However, if you guys disagree, I'll respect your decision. Also, I tried a new mottled method, how does it look? :D 18:22, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit ^^ 02:15, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:02, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

There is a litle gray smudged into the earpink 15:58, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I think it's supposed to be like that... 20:23, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it's my style of giving cats fluffy ears. I'm not changing that unless it needs to be smudged more or blurred more and I'm informed by another member. 00:57, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I adore this image. CBA? 21:03, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oakstep (Lo) - For Approval
Hmmmm..... I'm never doing stripes with the pencil again. XD This is the best I could do to match it. Comments? 00:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading and darken the overall shading a tiny bit~ Also, smudge the earpink into the ear a bit, and the stripes on the tail seem to be edging away from the lineart along the bottom... I hope that made sense... Fix it? OuO 03:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 13:59, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (Alt. MCA) - Withdrawn
It's been forever since I had something up for approval. Trying a new style of mottled cats but I think he looks a bit like a tabby... He was described as a mottled gray tom in Hollyleaf's Story under the name of Kestrelpaw and Barkface was the medicine cat, so he was a mca. Comments? 01:57, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah he does look like a tabby. Isn't this supposed to match my mottled gray version anyway? 01:59, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I honestly have no idea how you did that, it's incredible. But I tried. 02:11, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I can always send you the .xcf, if you like C: Also, I used the pen jitter tool with a darker and lighter shade, then slightly blurred it. 02:12, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'd love that. I PM you my email on facebook. Thanks Ivy! 02:19, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this, so I can work on a rogue. Anyone who wants to take this over, may. I had no hope of matching Ivy's epicness anyway... 20:06, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (Ki) ~ CBA
Cloudy has a weakness for black cats. Now, the changes from Dazzle's image may not be showing. 17:15, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading 8D 14:19, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I know you probably colorpicked, but can you define the earpink just a tad? 16:20, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And Ivy, the ear pink is fine. I don't think you're looking at the right image. 20:11, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I really don't see anything else wrong. CBA? 20:24 Sun Apr 1

Heathertail (Alt.A)~For Approval
I don't think I uploaded it right, but I tried. Comments? 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded-- got rid of the waste 18:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I don't know what happened to the last one. It's not in the declined nor in the approved, I thought this was being worked on already. 19:33 Fri Mar 30

No, it's fine. Mounty, you derp. =P

Define and darken the shading. 20:23, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Heathertail.apprentice.alt.png. 20:32, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Defined and darkened the shading and renamed it 21:29, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Loonie, would it be instead because Heathertail has another one? 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, head, and back paws. 21:50, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

When did that get there? *wasn't there before* smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. 22:36 Fri Mar 30

Define the shading, and I think there's waste on her front paws as well. 03:52, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Got rid of the waste and defined the shading 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

The ear-punk ear-pink seems to go over the line thing next to the ear... o3o On both ears, by the way. It's your choice, but if you want to, can you define the depth in the eye? *Your choice* Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, too. And it might just be my computer, but there seems to still be waste, too. Sorry if that made no sense about the ear and the line and the ear-punk ear-pink x3 13:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more ^^ 13:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the back ear. And, optional, but can you add a little shading to the side of the face that's not towards us? It'll give it more depth. 21:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC

Reuploaded--defined the shading, smudged the earpink into the pelt and got rid of the waste 22:41, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste on his ear, back paw, and front paw. 23:03, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink some more and blur it. 23:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this. And try to not upload a different image every time you reupload. 23:45, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--removed the waste and blured the earpink into the pelt 21:48, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Moonshine, stop uploading a new image each time. Rename it what Atelda told you to. 21:56, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I tried but it became a redlink. I don't know what to do! I am sorry 22:00, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Rogue Blanks - CBA
Changes very likely aren't showing. This is mostly just for the longhaired. Please try not to comment on the anatomy; it's already been approved and anatomy has been decided on. 00:35, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I really like these rogue blanks, Oblivion. But on the Short Male, to me the feet seem a little blurry. Feel free to disagree with me, it could just be with my computer. 00:42, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's the wiki, actually. There've been some issues with the images recently, and the changes haven't been showing properly. 00:43, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I saw that yesterday, Cloudy. Just now, the Long Male has changed back to the older blanks. 00:46, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

For me, the long female is the only one showing. Also; a good way to tell if the male's changes are showing is if it's transparent. If not, no changes. 00:47, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I can only see the short haired male, but it looks epic! :3 01:21, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Looks awesome! All four! I like longhaired one best :D ,8:16, April 1,2012 (UTC)

Okee I'm gonna be a nit picking butt X3 but it's only for the long hairs you don't have to do these things it's just my opinion. Maybe add some floof to the hocks and their elbows I guess (I don't know what they're called) and the floof on the chest seem to be sorta cut off right before it gets to the head. Maybe trying getting rid of the curve that is right there (if that makes sense) Anyway, I'm done babbling. These look AMAZING! <33 15:30 Sun Apr 1

Re-uploaded. Thanks to Mounty and Leggy for the assistance c: 16:48, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

These look perfect <3 CBA? 16:49 Sun Apr 1

I'm sorry, both for interrupting and for my inability to see the blank well enough, but it appears there's long fur on the front of the haunch, and it looks odd to me there. If it's not, ignore my comment. 20:07, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's supposed to be like that. It's that way on the apprentices and on the loners. I'm going to continue the CBA. 20:12 Sun Apr 1