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Mossyfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
She's back you guys. (Snowdapple said I could post this after it was archived so here ya go)

Near the tail diagonal almost from the very back patch, the shading's a little blotchy. 00:21, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading

smooth the shading.

re-up Why won't you smooth out????

There's a little bit of leaking shading where the body meets the tail. 01:22, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

you think you could remove some of the white dots in the pupil? it makes it hard to see

re-up There's no leaking shading, it's probably just the texture.

No, look at the area I circled in red. The patch of shading I was trying to point out to you doesn't touch the lineart at all and also looks kind of hard edged. If it's texture, you should probably smooth it out there or whatnot because the shading really does appear to be leaking. 20:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Eh, not too happy.

its not like ivy's suggestion damaged ur image lol. just had to point that out. Life actually sucks 24/7  so   lol 06:50, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the brown patch on the > front leg could be a little bigger, as it seems to cover more length on the apprentice

re-up Redid the texture because I didn't like it.

Beautiful! Maybe define the texture just a tiny bit? Good job! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 01:57, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you add a tiny bit of shading on <- ear?

Prehaps define the tail shading better 21:26, 6/06/2017

re-up Thanks Cosmo!

Define the facial shading better. 01:53, 6/09/2017

Define the shading depth. 01:57, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

re-up may lighten shading

Define the earpink 12:45, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out and/or lighten the shading a little? 12:51, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Let me know if it needs smoothing.

The shading depth could at least be smoothed out a little. Great job! This is really pretty. 01:12, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Thanks Shy!

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the face and tail. Looks nice!

re-up thanks! ^^

Define the texture on the brown patch on the shoulder a smidge. 21:15, 6/15/2017

Can you define which one? I see two that could possibly be the one you're talking about. Is it on the left or right?

I'm pretty sure it was the only visible shoulder patch, as the other one on --> side is more on the arm. http://vvcap.com/8Bm0RHbyN4u 01:14, 6/16/2017

re-up Technically I would count that as a back patch, but I guess it's also in the shoulder area.

Furled Bracken (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Comments? 17:09, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and blur the stripes a little more. They look softer on his other images. 17:48, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:00, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there are more stripes on the ancient and sharpclaw. Also, smooth the shading some more everywhere. 18:52, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Okay, I added a tail stripe and a haunch stripe, but if this needs more stripes still then I'll add more. :P 19:18, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I really think you should add stripes at least to the tail. There are 13 stripes (I think I counted right) on the tails of both of the other images, whereas this only has eight, which is significantly less. 20:14, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes look blotchy, and the shading, I can't tell the difference. Did ya smooth it? 21:35, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Well, I sure did try! :) 21:47, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The face stripes don't appear to match the other images

Reuploaded I'm going off of the ancient image. 22:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say that the sharpclaw image is first in the set. 22:54, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah. You gotta match both of 'em Shy. Also, well done on the approved images of yours. I'm genuinely proud of you on your progress. 22:56, 6/06/2017

Perhaps you could give some shape to the haunch shading? Also, the shading seems to be leaking in some places. 18:40, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you so much, Broken! 19:38, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add more stripes to his --> leg or haunch thing? And his like shoulder chest area? It has more on his other images Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded 21:08, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the line art in a few places all around the image.

Can you please redline them? 01:42, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I mean, it's sorta,,, everywhere

Reuploaded 17:56, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the hard-edged lines in the earpink, and smooth out all the shading all over the image, it doesn't look different then the other uploads where I've told you to smooth it out 19:33, 6/08/2017

Reuploaded 20:11, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

For the stripes on the tail, especially the part closest to the body, can you make them reach the lineart? Some of them seem to just stop a little before the lineart. For the stripes on the main body, can you make them taper a bit? 16:19, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:20, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the stripes. 18:13, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little and smooth out that bit of shading on the back

Reuploaded 19:34, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the right front leg. 12:48, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:16, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

I still think that the stripes should be tapered a bit. 19:38, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:21, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hard-edged stripe. 01:59, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pupil? I think you put a highlight over a pixel in the pupil, and if the blank has set pupils, you can't change them. (Unless putting a highlight over the pupil is fine, idk, all I know is Snowed said no changing the pupil if it's pre-set

Reuploaded Yikes! 02:27, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes seem to be longer on his other images

Reuploaded 23:11, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere 00:46, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:14, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Smooth shading near the rear?(No rhyme intended! :P) 21:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad, and define the light on <-- paw. Also, I belive there is leaking shading on --> back paw, and eye color leaking outside the lineart. 21:39, 6/06/2017

Reups Thanks Shypaw! And broken, the front paw you're talking about isn't supposed to have any light on it. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, maybe add some shading to the <--- ear (just a tad) and darken the nose colour? 22:15, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there is any nose color, and if there is, define it a bit 22:33, 6/06/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the front paw farthest from us. Also, lighten the shading a little bit? 22:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused with your shading placement. The shading on the tail, back, and chest/neck area indicate that the light is coming from <--- (from the right/behind the cat) while the legs, haunches, and head indicate that the light is coming from the ---> (from the left/in front of the cat). I believe you're going to have to switch one of these in order for it to make sense. 23:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I switched around the shading. Is it better now? --ErmineGlow (talk) 13:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading around the belly and definitely the face shading need to be swapped now. Also, define the light on the closest hind paw.

Vec said that if I only switched on of the shading parts around, I would be good. I switched around the legs and haunches, so I don't think I need to swap the chest/belly and face shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I made a mistake (mostly because I was super tired when I wrote that, but that's not important); the head shading needs to be swapped (covering more of the <--- face with the light coming from the <---). Don't only just take my word. That's why there are other people here. I'm bound to make mistakes (like I just did). Danny's got a good eye for critiques. As for the belly shading, I personally think it's optional (artist's choice) for this shading perspective. If you're keeping it, I think it should be swapped so it hugs the foreleg instead of the hind leg. Or you could make it just emcompass the lower part of the belly. 23:28, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

The shading's leaking a little bit on the lower chest and the haunch, and I think the earpink might be layered over the lineart in ---> ear? 22:35, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on his back and some in the upper left corner of the image. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 13:34, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and the closest back leg/paw

There's some waste on the back and above the head. 19:04, June 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Opps, I didn't mean leaking, what I meant was waste! Lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 19:11, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There is still some shading leaking on the back leg closest to us. 13:00, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:21, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's leaking shading almost everywhere, see here http://vvcap.com/sJTZiQGhuRX <span style="">09:38, 6/11/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:37, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define <--- earpink. 18:15, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:49, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Add some light to the back leg furthest from us? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 23:46, June 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * Not light, I mean shading. My bad. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:01, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:32, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the haunch a little bit

Re-ups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:26, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is still leaking on the haunch. 01:33, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

The highlight in the eyes needs to be in the provided hole in the pupil I think

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:10, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste all around the back. 23:22, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:25, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the closest back paw. Not the leg, just the paw

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:46, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten shading a little.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:07, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 20:35, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Raven Pelt (W) ~ For Approval
The only thing I like is the texture and the colors are from the rogue. -- 17:47, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs and it seems as thought there's some extra lineart underneath both paws closest to us. 19:14, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the texture

Reups I'm...not sure what to do about the "extra lineart" since I don't see any. Could I have a redline, please? -- 19:34, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't know how to redline. I double checked to make sure it wasn't just my eyes and it was, sorry for the confusion. :) 19:42, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

I know it was said above, but the texture really needs to be defined imo. <span style="">23:37, 6/12/2017

Reups --  16:49, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten him up. I can hardly make out anything save for the eye color and earpink, and my screen makes things seem lighter than they are. 00:22, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I actually colorpicked from the rogue so I kind of want to refrain from changing the color --  00:32, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry exwifey but I think it should be lightened a bit too, I can't make out anything. 00:54, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Agree^^ Needs to be lightened

Violet Dawn (W) - For Approval
Okay cool

It might just be me, but I can't see the art... -- 18:35, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

How bout now?

I can see the image. Add some shading to the front paw furthest from us. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 18:50, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yup, see it now. Maybe define shading depth on the back and possibly the tail? -- 18:55, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

reups Really hated the shading. Redid it.

Smooth out the shading a little on by the front of her leg? 12:45, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups The little triangle of shading on the shoulder?? I think that's what you meant

Smooth out the texture a bit, especially on the face and by the ears. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:30, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I smoothed the face texture because I agree that it was rough but the rest of the texture is the same way I have it on her queen image so?? Her images have generally defined texture

Add a but of shape to the neck shading - maybe curve it some to shape the head, b/c it seems a little straight across atm

reups This look better?

Dew Nose (W) ~ For Approval
I'm proud of this! Comments? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 18:53, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the stripes? This is super good! I love the nose. :) 19:21, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes are the same color as the ES, so I don't know if I should..? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 19:23, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

i don't think the color is the problem, it's the fact that they are over smudged. Perhaps unsmudge it a bit? (also this is cute :3)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Does this look better? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:15, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Seems too dark, and the pattern fades into the shading on the back. <span style="">04:45, 6/15/2017

Re-uploaded. It's the same colors, and there must be a lot of shading on the back, I suppose. Plus there's a black patch on the back. It must also be because of the color of shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:55, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups again. I tried making the stripes more visible under the shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:59, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be more visible under the neck/back shading. 22:11, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Bristlekit (Star) ~ For Approval
Just to let an admin know, there are a bunch of unneeded and incorrect files for Bristlekit, if you just search up "File:Bristlekit" and see some. 23:02, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Can you colorpick from a lighter spot on the kit image? I can't really see the shading all that well.

Reuploaded Yeah, I agree it was a bit dark. 01:00, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

^^This is better. Define the light on the tail and smooth the shading some?

Reuploaded 01:23, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Is it my bad eyesight, because I see some texture on the kit. <span style="">03:00, 6/15/2017

I can't see it? Is there some? 03:28, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell myself, but maybe? http://vvcap.com/3M1TDzQVnSE <span style="">04:04, 6/15/2017

I can't tell either. Is Spooky around to confirm or deny this? :) 04:18, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Spooky isn't the OA, Winter. Please make sure to check the file history completely first. Raven is the OA (Diablo is their current username), and they do pop up from time to time. While it might seem like there's texture, I do know that Diablo has a very intricate shading style, and it's possible that might be what we're seeing. I think we can leave it as it is for now, and if it turns out that it is texture, then we have the tweak page for a reason.

Sorry, I'll check next time. And that's fine, I cna always tweak it later. 21:55, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I asked diablo when I tried this image, and they said they didn't know whether or not it had texture as they did it a while ago Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:23, June 16, 2017 (UTC)chat

Okay, I'll just leave it. Thanks for the information. 13:59, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little bit, and define the light on the tail. 22:13, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reup 00:13, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
Shown as solid in the manga of BP; he has other alts for this, including one from the same manga. In case your wondering, no, this doesn't have texture, neither do his other alts for this; it's just the shading that makes it seem like it does. Comments? 04:32, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Prehaps soften the head stripes, they seem too sharp compared to the alt kittypet, although I haven't compared them. <span style="">04:49, 6/15/2017

Add some lighting to the back legs? I like this, good job, Bluestar! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 05:12, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. I'm holding off on softening the head stripes, as, if anything, I'd say they are softer than on the kittypet and leader alts. 19:45, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

Reuploaded. 21:49, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define tail shading. 21:58, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:22, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart at the base of the chest

Reuploaded. 01:53, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Nettlepad (W) - For Approval
2 minutes into this image and i said, "i already know which terrible path this is going down." oops. i was right. Life actually sucks 24/7  so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 02:55, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a lil bit?

reup   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 04:55, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

I cannot tell the difference between your last upload Life, so what tool are you using to define the shading? <span style="">07:55, 6/16/2017

reup   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 08:43, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Defines the speckles on the back? They are blending with the shading too well, unless it is just my screen. Burnt I am still so jealous of your charart <span style="">14:29 Fri Jun 16

Define the tail shading.<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 15:23, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Blossom (W) - For Approval
I'm pretty sure putting this up again is allowed, did what was said after the last reupload before this was declined because of lack of work. 13:53, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Rain (TAQ) (Alt R) ~ For Approval
... this looks extremely creepy. Anyway, this is an alt for the missing eye, but everything else is the exact same as the other image, since I was told I could do that like it is in Percy's case

There should be pale fur covering it

Reuploaded there is pale fur covering it and the surrounding area^ I changed the color a bit, but it's definitely there

I feel like the eye socket should be there still. I know the eye is gone, but the socket should be left behind imo <span style="">21:18, 6/16/2017

I agree with Broken. 21:48, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

no, it shouldn't. it literally says it covers where it used to be. that goes against he description. 22:04, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, didn't see that. It's fine then. 22:12, June 16, 2017 (UTC)