Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 132

Snowflake (Ki) ~ Approved
Best attempt at texture. ^^ 03:06, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to this ==> leg. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading and blur the neck shading a little. 22:45, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste above the <== ear, and blur the shading a bit. 19:52 Thu Jan 22

There's no waste, actually o_O my phone was showing something completely different 22:38 Thu Jan 22

Define the shading, please. i literally can't see any.-- 21:37, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink on the <== ear a little more. 02:48 Sun Jan 25

Re-upped 15:39, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. The back paw tells me it's coming from <== here and the rest ==> there. Also, add more shading to ==> leg. She/he looks good! ^^ ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 01:44, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding some more depth to the shading, especially near the haunch area. 19:39, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit more, please.-- 02:04, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:59, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

I spy some waste by that left paw, and the space between the chest fluff and the tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:22, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 03:55, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:32, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

i still feel the neck shading needs more blurring. 13:50, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

I agree^^ and please define the light on the two front legs. 14:04, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

I literally can't blur it anymore  19:46, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

if your going with this lightsource could you expand the light on the chest some?? 16:28, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some depth to the shading, please? 19:56, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 22:40, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

The light source on the tail and back foot conflicts with the body. Think you could move the tail shading to the base of the tail and the shading on the back foot to the top of his foot? And then I'll CBA it, unless someone else has a comment. ^_^ 00:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading on his/her right foot can be blurred a little. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 00:22, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? As promised. 16:42, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved.