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Ratscar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
All I did was add the torn ear and scar, of which came from the warrior. OA was Silver. Comments?  11:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and make it more pinkish? It looks gray right now. 15:36, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:53, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to complain about something that you just fixed, but could you redden the earpink? It looks too pale to me.... but the rest of this image is positively beautiful, really! :) 00:01, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

If it gets anymore red then it will be hard to see against the base coat. I think it's fine. 03:24 Thu Jul 5

Re-uploaded Thickened the scar...I thought it didn't match the warrior's very well o3o  11:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken it a bit more? :3 03:30, 06, 07, 2012

Enlarge the earpink and possibly make it the same color as the scar? 22:44, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? 04:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, re-uploaded 04:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the tear on his ear match the warrior. 16:42, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be longhaired. Sorry I just realized a small part got cut off. Don't worry, Ivypool is next. Low battery, sorry. 21:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on her chest. 22:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Her tail looks sorta flat...could you define/remove some shading...or add a "highlight"? OwO 22:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the body shading. 03:59, 04, 07, 2012

I say while this is up, the ear-pink closest to us should be blurred a bit, (Unless its my lap top). -- 08:57, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random black dot on her right paw... 00:02, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

That random black dot is lineart. However it does seem to be too thick. 02:15, 05, 07, 2012

Reuploaded Well, I managed to find her old .xcf so I redid what I've already previously done with this tweak. In all honesty, it makes me life tons easier. And if this is the correct version, then yes I see the waste and I fully intend to kill it  02:25, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

She's got a little waste by her paws, and in front of her tail. 20:56, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I already had pointed that out and said I'd take care of it  22:07, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks a bit flat - can you darken it? :3  22:45, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:17, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (W) - Tweaked
It looks redone, but I swear on my life that it isn't. Anyways, OA was Sandy with a re-do by me, and I redid the white patch, shading, fixed the earpink, and I added a fur texture. don't kill me, I like the texture  Comments for improvement? 22:21, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste under his butt. 22:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up th:e texture just a tad and define it on his tail. Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:03, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded:  01:07, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the fur texture more? It seems like he is two colors now. 01:57, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also make the actual lines for the fur smaller and add more? He looks mottled to me 02:39, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

And darken the overall shading as well. 23:18, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink if you want. o3o 23:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Ear pink's fine, but I redid the fur texture (too. many. times.), darkened shading, and I had to redo the white patch because it wasn't white with the texture. Also, please don't tell me to define the texture on the tail. It's /very/ hard doing it on a short-furred tail, and it won't show greatly even if I define it. 01:11, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Heavystep (A) - Tweaked
Ugh. This is frustrating me so much. I just cannot make this guy look three-dimensional. Anyway, I tweaked his shading to make it look less flat. I tried to smudge the stipes more to match the other images better, but that just looked worse. Comments would be much appreciated. ;n; Breeze  whisker  04:35, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a bit more. All hail Heavystep~

Define the earpink. o3o 23:28, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly add some depth to his eyes? 19:47, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Personally, I like the earpink on this one. x3 Breeze  whisker  15:39, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to darken shading, define earpink, and blur facewhite. OA was some crazy person. 23:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and define the shading. 23:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:47, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white on the muzzle some more. 18:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hate the shading with a firey passion. I miss GIMP :( 21:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights(?) and the shading looks flat, try defining it more. 22:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading since they seem blotchy. 00:47 Mon Jul 9

Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her front leg. 19:34, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach and haunch shading. There's also a strip of shading on the back - blur that, or remove it, since the light source is coming from there. 14:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
This was redone for the same reasons as the warrior. OA was Silver. I feel bad doing this one ._. Skt Omnia vincit amor 08:03, July 7, 2012 (UTC)\

So much better <3. Define the values in the eyes a bit. 12:18, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail shading. So pretty<3 21:12, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and blur the haunch shading. Nice textures, Skt! Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  22:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink matches the other images, Sand. it's fine. ^^;;

Smudge the edges of the patch near the shoulder a tiny bit. 06:23, 09, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded. Yuck. Skt Omnia vincit amor  07:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) - Tweaked
Lovely Teldy gave me the file, so it was an easy tweak. Colors are from the warrior/deputy now, so I'm not changing them. And the lineart's from her alt apprentice. So pretty much the only thing touchable is the shading. :P OA was Teldy and it needed to match the other images. Comments? 21:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:26, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done 21:37, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel or two of lineart sticking off of her torn ear. 05:40, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean? The torn ear's from the alt. apprentice. 01:00, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Shading still needs major defining. 01:12, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 09:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Otterheart (W) - Redone
More or less redone. OA was me. Shading made me wanna gag. Comments? 21:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and define it 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

This is the same earpink I use on a lot of my warrior images.... just copied and pasted. I think it's fine, sorry. 00:59, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Shading needs defining. 14:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt. L) - Tweaked
Oh... That looked so much better in photoshop... Anyway, shading and highlights needed to be tweaked. I also added depth in the eyes. 02:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. 04:59, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his legs, maybe? Breeze whisker  05:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:02, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his tail and chest. 19:32, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the face "highlight". 02:27, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest and haunch highlight. 06:47, 09, 07, 2012

Sparrowfeather (DF) (W) ~ Redone
OA was this super duper amazing person and my favourite Canadian ouo;; Needed to match the rogue. All of the colors and opacity are the same as the rogue. Comments? 08:52 Sun Jul 8

Blur the earpink. ouo 14:11, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it has to be renamed Sparrowfeather (DF).warrior.png because it isn't showing up on the page. 16:16, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Favourite 8DD I love youuu <3 And yeah, she's right; I even put that on the nomination page. Maybe blur the scar closest to her eye (but not the one on her eye). 17:22, July 8, 2012 (UTC) 17:22, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded D'aaww I love you too Loonie <333 And I know it's supposed to be renamed, I'm going to bug Atelda about that when she gets back from her music camp. 19:23 Sun Jul 8

Blur the light part on the paws a little. 19:53, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:57 Sun Jul 8

Foxleap (Ki) - Redone
Arg. *has seem to lost all tabby skill* I tried to match the warrior the best I could x-x OA was Brightfrost with a redo by me awhile ago. Comments? 14:33, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and maybe lighten the pelt just a bit. 14:36, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:49, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 15:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''This pelt color makes it hard to blur earpink, and keep it noticeable. e.e 15:10, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a little bit more. Try to make it match the warrior. 15:23, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The shading was making the pelt color dark, I'm guessing. I color picked all the colors of the warrior. I ligthened the base up a lot. 18:46, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and define the shading on this > part of the body. 00:52, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Adorable <3 But I think the hue for the pelt is wrong, it looks a bit too pink to me. 02:25, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 02:36, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.... and then you might want to lighten the pelt color a tiny bit. oue 06:57, 09, 07, 2012

Adderfang (D) - Redone
Same as the warrior. OA was Thistleshine. Everything's the same as the warrior besides the tail, which should match anyway. 19:09, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't match the warrior. 19:31, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it's the same. Both images are exactly the same, as Loonie pointed out; I watched her do the image. I just think that the shading might be darker on the warrior. 19:48, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No, he's right xD I forgot that I'd brightened the highlights on the warrior. Changes, y u no show? 19:52, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Braveheart (W) - Tweaked
OA was my momma. Just ran the color replacement tool over it to lighten the shade of brown and then redid the ear-pink to match. 04:14, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Not mine Scar, Leafstrike's. xD I was just fixing the paw lineart. Do you think you could try and get rid of the little specks the look like mottles while this is up? 09:25, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? 15:07, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rainstorm (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Roo, and it needed to be more realistic. Yes, this is tweaked. Confetti tool'd the already in place mottles, and tweaked the ear pink/played around with the shading. If the changes aren't showing, look here.

Lighten the shading. 12:00, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 12:02, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the back? I think it's too dark, but if everyone else disagrees, then...-shrugs- 14:23, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shoulder and the haunch shading just a tad? 15:06, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also played around a bit...

Hussar (Lo) - Tweaked
Defined the scar, along with a few minorly minor changes. :3 OA's were Evanphoto (I think), minor tweak by Bramble, Cloudy and Rainfacestar. Comments? 07:10, 09, 07, 2012

Could you sharpen the scar a tad? It'll make it more realistic. 18:16, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Hazeltail (Ki) - Tweaked
Ew... Made the facial marking not go over her eye. OA I think was Rainwhisper. Comments? o.e 07:53, 09, 07, 2012

Leopardfoot (Q) ~ Redone
OA was the wonderful Cloudy. She needed mottles. I made her a dark tortie because it seemed to match her description the best. But I'm open for ideas (it was either this or a Savannah cat) Comments? 08:52 Mon Jul 9

I see some waste around the ear and back. 08:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 09:01 Mon Jul 9

She's not described as a dark tortie though. She's described as a black mottled cat. Now the only ones of those I've seen are black leopards, so I suggest reffing one of those, but if you can find a normal cat that's mottled black, feel free. But I don't think we should bend the description that much... 09:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bleh I tried x.x 10:06 Mon Jul 9

Make them slightly less uniform? 10:28, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *destroys* 10:52 Mon Jul 9

The mottles still look orange. Maybe tint them so they're a little more grey/black? 16:41, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, she's pretty much spot-on (hehe), that's how black leopards, and also black tabbies, look in the sunlight. Breeze whisker  18:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanfur (W) - Redone
Redone for shading, and the tabby markings didn't go all the way. You guys said you like the markings on the old one, so I tried to make the stripes sort of blur together as the coat got longer. I don't think I did it quite right. .-. Breeze  whisker  17:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

As always, you never fail to amaze, Breeze. However, the shading at the bottom of the tail could use some lightening to benefit the picture, and the back shading overall could be lightened. 17:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The back shading seems fine. It shows lots of depth like this... 17:57, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. <3 Breeze  whisker  18:52, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.