Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Nominations/Declined 10

Willowbreeze - Tweak Nomination
File:Willowbreeze.kit.png and the rest. Need to be brown (even though she's definitely not) I'm like 99% sure there's a cite in CP that says she's some shade of gray, but until someone finds that,,


 * skt added the cite, no longer needed. feel free to just archive this or smth

Fernsong - Tweak Nomination
(All) He is described as pale, and idk if I'm just being picky, but maybe we can make his pelt color to match Micah or Gooseberry better? I would like the warrior and apprentice unless Jayie wants to do them. Also, sorry if this should be a redo nomination ^^` 00:53, October 25, 2017 (UTC)


 * Idk. The base color looks kind of pale already, unless anyone thinks should make the stripes paler too? Actually, now that I look at it, the pale parts make it look really pale, but the base color itself is just regular yellow. I say make it lighter.
 * looks pale enough 01:23, October 25, 2017 (UTC)
 * It looks bright yellow to me

He was called pale in Darkest Night, so should we not do it yet, if it passes? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:13, October 25, 2017 (UTC)
 * It's fine and there's more than one shade of pale.
 * we did a vote in PC Cosmossness, so it counts.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:30, October 25, 2017 (UTC)
 * I say lighten it by only a few shades, but not drastically. It could stand to be paler. 09:31, October 25, 2017 (UTC)
 * the base itself is already extremely pale, though, Branch. Pale means the base, not the shading. It also never means the stripes unless otherwise specified.
 * Eh, it's alright. And agreeing with comments above^ 12:27, 10/25/2017
 * 20:10, October 25, 2017 (UTC)
 * Now that I look at it its the shading that's throwing off the base. It's fine. 21:58, October 25, 2017 (UTC)
 * 00:09, October 26, 2017 (UTC)
 * it looks fine to me. 00:23, October 26, 2017 (UTC)

Tree ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Tree.loner.png Should have an extra toe on a hind paw. I'd like this, should it pass. 03:22, November 8, 2017 (UTC)
 * Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:30, November 8, 2017 (UTC)
 * 14:04, November 8, 2017 (UTC)
 * This is not done on other polydactyl cats such as Blackstar or Spider Paw, and I think it would be difficult to show anyway with the angle of the loner charart. 20:57, November 8, 2017 (UTC)
 * 23:42, November 11, 2017 (UTC)
 * I think it's possible. Didn't we do it on Spider Paw or am I totally wrong?
 * We tried to do it on Spider Paw but it didn't work out and got removed during the approval process, so this shouldn't really be any different
 * Yeah, because of how tiny these blanks are, it's not exactly the easiest thing to do. Spider Paw's ES had it (before it was removed) due to there actually being some room to do so. There isn't with these blanks.
 * 18:11, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Cherrytail (All) - Tweak Nomination
Needs to be long-furred for fluffy cite. (Fluffy does mean long-furred, right? It's different from thick-furred I think)
 * can I have the warrior 21:50, November 11, 2017 (UTC)
 * if i may pop in here, fluffy doesnt always mean long furred CØØKIE (talk) 22:09, November 11, 2017 (UTC)
 * I've looked up synonyms for fluffy and other ways it is described. Fluffy is like "extremely fluffy, full of fluff" and I think it would mean long furred. If we decide it like this, wouldn't others who are described as fluffy, be long haired? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:27, November 11, 2017 (UTC)
 * I want my kit. And I thought fluffy=/=long furred? idk though I might be wrong
 * it does not equal long-furred here. if it's continually mentioned, that's one thing... but it's not.
 * Agreeing with Jayce 00:32, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
 * 01:24, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
 * 22:41, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
 * 22:41, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Q) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Hawkfoot.queen.png I'm honestly having a lot of trouble seeing the earpink. Just the wrong shade for the fur colour I guess.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:01, November 13, 2017 (UTC)
 * 18:11, November 14, 2017 (UTC)
 * I'd say make it the color of the star's image if this passes. 00:32, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
 * I can see it just fine.
 * 11:11, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
 * It's actually pretty visible to me. 22:41, November 15, 2017 (UTC)
 * 22:15, November 17, 2017 (UTC)
 * C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 16:25, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
 * 16:29, November 23, 2017 (UTC)
 * 16:29, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

Birdwing (KP) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Birdwing.kittypet.png Very minor but, she shouldn't have the scar above her eye. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 08:27, December 12, 2017 (UTC)
 * Why? That kittypet image is actually from SkyClan and the Stranger, where she did have a scar above her eye. That's actually part of the plot in the first book...
 * Oh it was? Hm, sorry I did not know! This can just be archived then. Thanks for saying it, but how come the warrior and queen don't have it..? Just wondering. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 08:30, December 12, 2017 (UTC)
 * It's alright! You weren't here when that set of books was released. =P Anyways, the other images don't have it due to an elderly Twoleg using what looked like some kind of ointment to heal her scar. Birdpaw getting said help from the Twoleg and what she and the others did is basically the entire plot of The Rescue, like I said.
 * OH I see now! Thanks for clearing it up. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 08:37, December 12, 2017 (UTC)

Drizzlepaw (A) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Drizzlepaw.apprentice.png I know that this image won't be used anymore, but it's been bugging the heck out of me. The speckles are gross, the shading is really terrible, and, just everything about it is old and bad. I'd like this, if it passes. <span style="">23:30, 12/12/2017
 * I don't really see a point to redoing it if it's not canon? You can just improve it on your own time and not have to reupload it. You'll still be satisfied that it's better, but it's not really needed to be officially redone.
 * Agreeing with danny. 00:52, December 13, 2017 (UTC)
 * only because it's currently not in use.
 * ^<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:38, December 13, 2017 (UTC)
 * 05:06, December 14, 2017 (UTC)