Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=Tweaked= Take it to the tweak page

=Images Pending Approval= Please use this section to put images up for approval only.

Leaf (SqH) (Ki) - For Approval
00:44, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

another Himalayan, I see Lighten the shading, smooth it out as well, and blur/smudge the pale parts. -- 00:46, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

^ adding to potato's comment; smudging them would probably work better to work with the flow of fur on the blank

sorry potato. '''reuploaded. 15:22, September 19, 2019 (UTC)'''

I haven't seen Himalayans with lighter parts before... if you're going to make the image match their parent's, wouldn't it make sense for the darker parts to be the points, and the lighter parts the base? ​​​​​

Oh. Alright. I made the parts lighter because I didn't want it to seem as if I copied Potato's design. 15:35, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Just like to let you know you can do something similar to my design for Squirrel, just maybe do a darker gray and make the hue different than what I have. =D -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smudge the pale parts and lighten them some, since I can't see the shading at all in those places. -- 00:29, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Damn. Has this been approved? I wanted to put up a Leaf image. I spent ages... -Wavetail (talk) 07:55, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

it hasn't been approved yet, but this is only for critiques of the image. that said, can you lighten up the points some, they look black right now. 07:57, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Am I allowed to do that? How...? Also, I put up my own. Should I remove it? Wavetail (talk) 08:10, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

When I tried to smudge, the darker parts got white... the smudge tool hates me. Sorry for being such an unstable person. '''reuploaded. 09:05, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading and expand it on the face. -- 12:09, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:50, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

Remove some shading on the foreleg (should only encompass half of the limb like the tail) and same thing with the ear closest to us. 19:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:37, September 22, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add some more depth to the ear shading? 14:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

likewise red is waste, and blue is where you should remove shading. 18:45, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:06, September 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the earpink a bit more

shading is also leaking away from the lineart above the tail

Still working? ​

'''reuploaded. ye. 03:53, October 4, 2019 (UTC)'''

The earpink is still pretty much as sharp as before - I meant, smooth the transition between it and the base, so it's not so clearly a line

Stormcloud (Ki) - For Approval
First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png ​​​

The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. -- 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. -- 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

My art program doesn’t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe

01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe it’s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading 00:42, 9/28/2019

Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesn’t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading over all? 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me if it’s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch.  W i n d s o n g   (talk)   09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink color and darken the stripes a tad. 17:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Welp I tried --Wavetail (talk) 00:40, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes on the body (not the tail). His images show they are just as smudged as the tail stripes. -- 00:42, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna take a while --Wavetail (talk) 00:58, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Someone pls give me something to improve on I’m DYING without anything to work on --Wavetail (talk) 00:11, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

From what I've seen, you can ask for comments after 3-5 days have passed. As for the image, I think the stripe color is still too light and the tail stripes should be slightly thicker to cover more of the tail. -- 00:13, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this is better Potato --Wavetail (talk) 01:27, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Hiiii Wavetail!! I love the stripes! Can you smudge the earpink?  Crystie  ''Can't help  loving  me  14:24, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I over smudged it :P --Wavetail (talk) 23:37, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, I think the earpink could be smudged more. -- 23:40, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

If it isn't already, add the earpink layer under the shading possible? At the moment it looks very flat compared to the area around it which is covered in shading

Could you darken the shading tint? it kinda blends a bit with the stripes at the moment. 15:13, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a tad? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:36, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smudge the earpink as in shading or earpink and fur? --Wavetail (talk) 01:39, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 2) - For Approval
Here is your proof Potato can do tabbies that are not pointed. Very proud of this one. -- 00:59, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly match him more to his manga appearance?

Reuploaded I think this matches- added a white tail-tip, more white to the back paw, more stripes on the forehead, and thinned the stripes to match the tabby style. -- 22:57, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be less stripes to match. I'd also, if you're amendable, recommend the eye color be made to match the main set (at least for the most part)

Reuploaded This better? -- 22:42, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Getting so. If one lets go of the past warrior, simply look at what you'd do if making it for the manga rn, and adjust the stripes. Notably, the base on the manga is lighter, the stripes thicker, the haunch one goes to a point and not all the way across, they are more sketchy and not simply drawn, and there are stripes directly next to where the white is on each leg and the tail. Is what I'm noticing so far, do attempt to notice whatever else

Reuploaded will add face stripes momentarily -- 23:49, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow this actually matches in terms of sketch and thin -- 23:52, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the haunch one a little further - make it longer, that is, and smooth the haunch shading. Definitely got what i meant otherwise, thanks

Reuploaded Thanks Spooky! -- 00:11, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Turtlecrawl (Ki) - For Approval
all colors directly from the actual layered file, Jayie sent it to me. No, the app doesn't really have texture that I can see, it's more a shading layer. I'm gonna go fiddle with the black layer to try and get it to match better. ​​

Re-uploaded. Hm, slightly better. ​​

Think the front paw closest to us and the hind paw closest to us should have the lighter ginger patches? The latter may be hidden by the shading idk. 19:28, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm confused... the front paw does have ginger. Please explain further? ​​

Are we doing T's yet? 16:36, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is a new image, meaning I can do it whenever I want.... this isn't a blank redo. ​

Re-uploaded. finally found out what lighter ginger Vec was talking about lmao

My bad, sorry. 16:41, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Red (SD) (K) - CBA
23:00, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Stick (W) ~ For Approval
Tinystream (talk) 18:57, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

There's two pixels of waste between the hind leg and the foreleg closest to us, and one stray pixel along the back (on the second back tuft from the top). 19:27, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Tinystream (talk) 20:18, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Rainfur (TC) (W) ~ CBA
19:25, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Jayclaw (K) - For Approval
Ok lets try this again! Moo (talk) 03:36, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Windstar (ki) ~ for approval
16:35, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

theres a tiny bit of waste on the muzzle area 17:03, 10/05/2019

Smokehaze (K) - For Approval
-- 21:14, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W) - For Approval
Colors from the original warrior. 01:06, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (K) ~ For Approval
01:52, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Heronwing (TC) (W) ~ For Approval
01:52, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
Since her and Poppyfrost's images are being redone, I decided to base the patter off of my Aunt Kathy's old cat, Maia. Comments? Also, I see the eyelashes; I'll fix them in a second. 03:25, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:27, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Unrelated but I must say that is beautiful Moo (talk) 07:06, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

One Eye (K) - For Approval
colours and stuff from the leader

Sandstorm (Alt.W 4) - For Approval
tried matching this one more to the field guide colours if that's all good?