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Lion's Roar (Ancient. alt) - For Approval
A little surprised nobody took this yet... If the cite was from The First Battle where he was an elder, he would get an ancient image as well. Quite proud of this, all colors from the alt elder. 11:46, August 4, 2015 (UTC)

Didn't Kate confirm ginger is same as orange? His trivia is already removed.

Lion's Roar is not ginger, he's golden. And golden and orange are not the same. 18:33, August 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yea that was my mistake. Oops :P

Lighten the shading on the neck fluff, if you can. I cant really see his pattern through it. 04:52, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Can someone rename this for me? I accidentally named it Lion's Rar lmfao. 07:05, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

The patches of missing fur don't really look like missing patches...just randomly different coloured tufts of fur. Try removing some of the lineart around them. Typically we don't have missing fur totally outlined. 07:37 Wed Aug 5

Re-uploaded I based it off his elder 07:58, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-named. Yeah, idk why he wouldn't get this... golden and ginger are nowhere near the same.

I accidentally saw him as ginger lol. Mind to smooth out the shading on the root of the tail and his back a bit?

What's with the darker part here?? Is that shading you forgot to smooth out or something?

It's shading- It's my style's usual waste. i'll get rid of it on my next reupload. 13:59, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:55, August 7, 2015 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Alt K) ~ For Approval
05:29, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Hmmm. She kind of looks like a smoke tabby. Would you mind getting rid of or darkening the pale chest? 13:25, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded darkened it 13:31, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the head and neck shading- I can't see it at all.

Re-uploaded Dark cats are fricking buttholes to shade with 13:58, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

You think dark cats are buttholes to shade? Try white cats xD Anyway, could you define the shading on the underbelly parts? Like between her front legs, and on the side of her front leg by her belly. 22:03, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Dark cats are literally the worst cats to shade ever ;; 09:37, August 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink, please. 03:06, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:28, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Millie (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
I fail x.x

Wasn't she described like this before she became an official warrior? Sorry if this is spam. ~User:Dewdrops56~ 05:44, August, 5, 2015

look at the allegiances for om6 06:01, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

THIS IS AWESOME HOW DID YOU DO IT I COULDN'T MATCH IT FOR THE WORLD =P Excuse the caps Anyway... Define the tail shading? 07:02, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups *shrinks* I did it with the files Foxy sent me :P  and I tried to define tail shading but I don't think it worked

Define the tail shading a bit more; I'm unable to really see it at all. Why not add another thin layer of shading and lower the opacity? Curse you, shorthair tails.

re-ups Added the tail on the secondary shading layer, and hopefully it's better.

shorthair tails can be a pain sometimes. Can you define the tabby stripes? It's a bit darker on the other alt images. 22:06, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's actually fine, in my opinion. The other images I did have stripes that don't show up more/less than this one. 08:18, August 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I raised the opacity by "1", and I expanded some of the stripes? If that seems better.

I have to agree with Stealthfire on this one. The stripes look darker on her other images. Also, could you define the shading on the two back paws?

Idk but could you possibly make the texture flow a bit neater? There are some crosses I see on her fur... 01:37, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Eh... Foxy's version(texture) was crossed and that's why I did it? I can change it though. Like this :)

Frecklewish (Alt.W5) ~ For Approval
I know about the conversation with the plain ginger version. I think a brown version alt qualifies as it's different chapters and completely different scenes. I couldn't decide between making a tabby or freckled so I did both. The shading is also a different style to what I usually do. 01:17, August 6, 2015 (UTC)

It really doesn't matter which scene it is, tbh. It's still a partial of an alt that she already has. We don't give blue grey alts for being called grey. We don't give tabbies alts when they aren't called a tabby and only called by their color, we don't give alts for silver grey cats being called silver, we also don't give alts to black and white cats when they are called black or white. If we are going to keep these two, I'd say we should add the removed alts back into Bluestar, Tallstar etc. one was declined in the past (and just to say, but Berry herself was against it then) I really don't think these two warrant, to be honest. The discussion had been here. 06:53, August 6, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, I'll keep this up until it's either declined or approved. This is a image with new techniques for me and I am proud. If it's declined, I'll hold onto it and wait for a different brown warrior needed to be made. 09:05, August 6, 2015 (UTC)

Erm, Burnt, that conversation was from 2013. Did you really go digging that up just to prove a point, especially one that specifically says that Berry agreed that the alt wasn't necessary? Personally, I think it is. They are from two different points in the novella, and I don't see how it's a partial, nor do Bluestar's alts have anything to do with this.

I knew the conversation was there long ago. (don't ask, I read archives sometimes out of boredom, and this one caught my attention) I still think it's unnecessary- It's a partial. It could be a dark shade, a pale shade or whatever as far as we know, and we don't know, It's basically like giving a dark alt for a cat without a specific shade. I still think this is unnecessary. 12:27, August 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I don't think this is necessary. I'm pretty sure it's a partial; pale brown is just a more specific form of brown -- and she already has a pale brown alt. We wouldn't give a brown alt to a pale brown cat, so why do we need two separate alt images? 14:10, August 7, 2015 (UTC)

Because it's a totally different scene from a completely different part of the novella, not part of Frecklewish's actual description, and she was called her real description in between that, I believe. It's not the same thing as giving..say, Bramblestar a normal brown alt for being called 'brown' when he's 'dark brown', because that's actually part of his description. This is not part of Frecklewish's description.

Can this please be shifted to the talk page? I'd like some comments on improving the art, as that's the whole point of putting it here. Also, if Fox's one isn't going ahead can this be renamed to alt 4? 00:19, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

I will not rename the image until we decide what to do with it. And technically, deciding what to do with the image is part of the approval process. As for the image, smooth out the shading and define the ear pink. It's pretty much non-existent on my screen.

Reupload What do you mean by smoothing the shading? Sorry it's a weird question I've had a long week. 00:59, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, basically. Or smudge it... Whichever you use. The shading looks a bit too...rough, I guess is the word I'm looking for. I don't want to say "blotchy", because that's always had a bit of a rude meaning to it (or at least that's what I was told).

Tbh, the pale brown alt works fine enough to represent all the "Browns" that were mentioned through out MV. I still think this is a partial of an alt we already have, we have no idea whether it's light or dark or whatever brown so the pale version works fine, tbh. 01:33, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Jayce on this one- if she was described this way in a completely different portion of the ebook, then it should be warranted imo. As for the image, blur/smudge the earpink a tad. 03:08, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:05, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh, it really doesn't matter if it is on a different scene. Brown ?=? Pale brown. We don't know what brown it is and the pale brown alt works fine with representing it. I still don't think this warrants- its a partial of pale brown, whatever scene it is described in. 07:38, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, Burnt, we get it. We know you don't think it's warranted. There's no need to comment every few times just to say that. Give others a chance to comment and say their opinion.

Let's say I agree with Burnt...