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Lionblaze (Alt. Warrior) ~ For Approval
First time I've truly loved how my texture came out (thank you for the tutorial, Ferk). Comments? 21:07, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

His eyes should be amber, like his other images. Also blur/smudge the shading (whatever your preference is) so it's a bit smoother. Could you also smudge or smooth out the texture a bit more too? All in all (I'm being nitpicky), this is really good. .o.

Reuploaded. I didn't realize the eyes had to match even if it's an alt. And thanks. 21:26, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Hey no problem! I'm sorry I never got around to that other one.... Oops. Anyway, friend, the texture on the tail should curve with the tail. It looks like it's all going one way. I wanna know how everyone gets their texture to look feathery like this. Please tell me how. Mine looks blocky and lame. 22:04, 10/6/2014

It looks like you've got a blank spot of shading on the back. Did you mean to do that? Ferk, try blurring your texture. That's how I get mine to look somewhat normal. 10:14 PM, Mon Oct 6, 2014

Reuploaded. Basicly, I put the texture layer on multiply and added the texture. Then, I blur it (using blur tool), and used the smudge tool at a size of 05 (Gimp). I set the layer opacity and then duplicated it (mostly to give it definition). And yes, I meant to do that. 22:22, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reuploaded. 23:39, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and feet, and blur (and possibly expand) the tail shading, mainly around the base of the tail. 06:39, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:48, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

No comments in a while, and I like this, so CBA? 14:44 Sun Oct 12

Sorry, but the shading on the side by the haunch is blotchy with a light patch surrounded by shadows. Also, you might want to curve the shading edges a bit more and blur it. And slightly nit-picking, but the shading is receding from the lineart on the back of the cat. 01:47, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. I've used this style of shading before (see Mistystar's Alt Warrior image), and no one commented on it before. As for the receding shading, it's actually the texture, and I can't really fix it. However, I'll change it if someone else agrees. 19:59, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Atelda. 00:47, 10/14/2014

Reuploaded. 00:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Remove the patch of light on the flank by filling it in with shading. 1:22 Tue Oct 14

Reuploaded. 20:07, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out your shading a bit. It seems really really dark in some spots and then really really light in other spots. 16:08, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is not required to be the same darkness throughout the entire image. While we're on the topic of shading, would you mind extending it and maybe adding some light, as I kinda did here? Red is where I think it could be expanded, and the blue would be the light. I also remember hearing that not all the back feet would be in shading unless the cat is sitting awkwardly- but I could be mistaken about that, and someone else is more than allowed to contradict me on that note.

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. 18:42, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading in the center of the body, darken the tail shading, define the head shading, and on the back leg closest to us, flip the shading and the light. It is backwards since your lightsource would have the light on top and the shading on the bottom. 19:56, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. Like I said before, I've used this style and lightsource before (the lightsource is coming from the top left corner), and it was never commented on. Also, I can see all of the shading just fine, and if I lighten the shading in the center of the body, I'll probably just be told to darken it again. However, if others agree, I'll change it. 20:13, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think your shading is fine. Beautiful job! 5:34 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Define the shading on the tail, and the shading and light on the feet. 14:29, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading is about as defined as it can get. 19:58, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (Star) - For Approval
this pattern was too hard to match Brick  05:55, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. Well done! 08:44, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, thanks! Brick 21:10, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

You need to make him paler to match the tweaked warrior (kit and apprentice shall be tweaked shortly); I just ran the dodge tool over it. 21:46, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, used the dodge tool and lightened the opacity of the flecks a bit. Brick 22:20, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

He needs to be paler I believe. And also it may be just me but the image looks tinted green. I also see stray solid pixels on the tail. 12:00, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, the image shouldn't be appearing greenish, and it doesn't look green on my screen. Might just be your monitor. Brick 15:32, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Changes, http://i58.tinypic.com/vsdf9x.png Brick  18:23, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

I'm not seeing any greenish tint on my screen. 7:58 PM, Sat Oct 11, 2014

The direction of light is confusing, particularly with the tail shading and a little bit with the chest. You also might want to consider darkening the shading for the chest/paws/face region. 01:52, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Don't darken it; define it. I know it's there, because of everything around it, but I can't see it well compared to some spots. 00:49, 10/14/2014

Re-ups, tried my best to define it. As for the spot of light on the chest, it should be alright, as I've seen other images use this light source before. And sorry for the late re-upload, I've had a geography test to revise on. Brick  The Bite of '87  18:53, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. This is amazing :) 18:21 Wed Oct 15

Re-ups, thanks :3 Brick   The Bite of '87  20:31, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Add depth to the tail shading? 1:33 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Re-ups Brick   The Bite of '87  15:55, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the darker flecks a little. 19:57, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Brick   The Bite of '87  05:34, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Tornear (star) ~ For Approval
Yep, this is very soon after my last one, is that even allowed...

Well, I tried, the stripes are really hard to match because the artist is obviously better than me, and trying to transfer the design onto a starclan image is annoying. I've only just noticed but why is Tornear called Tornear if he hasn't been described with a torn ear? 20:04, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

The shading seems quite flat. Darkening it or adding another layer of shading would be the fix. This is pretty! 21:36 Fri Oct 10

Re-uploaded Thank you, Hawky, I've duplicated both shading levels, so that it should be a lot more defined. -- 22:45, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink on his left ear? Brick  The Bite of '87  10:40, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Defined ear pink for both of his ears, which may of caused some of the shading to appear more pale. -- 22:45, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Might just be my screen but his stripes are looking a little green. --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 14:34, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think they look green, Eos. 17:44, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

I know it is my character art, but I don't think they look green, although if other people touch up on that I'll change it. 19:15, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

They actually do look a bit green to me. Maybe it's a highlight or something like that and it decided not to function properly.

Re-uploaded I've darkened the stripes and removed the highlight completely, but I can still see green, does anyone have any suggestions on how to fix that? 22:24, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps give the stripes a black or dark gray tint and that'll probably do the trick. 14:33, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks for that Tiger, but I've tweaked the texture, and I've multiplied the layer the stripes were on so they appear better, I hope.... --  17:45, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Are is eyes blue? If so make them crystallized. 21:29, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Eyes are perfectly fine. However, blur/smudge the shading on the back/haunch/whatever part of that body that is. Looks a bit too sharp. 00:51, 10/14/2014

He looks really blue.. perhaps try making his stripes more black?-- 01:22, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think it was the tinted shading making him appear blue, so I've edited the shading, hopefully that's done the job. I've also played around with his stripes a little, making them lighter, to appear even less green. x3 -- 17:52, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Make the stripes more dark gray like his other images. And perhaps add more stripes to the chest and legs? Not too many though just a couple more. 16:16, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tweaked the shading and the stripes. -- 16:56, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

They're still looking pretty green. Perhaps bring your shading more towards the black side of the spectrum? 02:54, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

I think using non-tinted shading will help. 1:32 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

The color is actually black shading. I think that if I set it to a certain layer type (eg. Multiply) it might help. P.S I use GIMP. c: -- 16:45, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm... it looks very blue on my screen. Are you sure changes are showing? 9:22 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Re-uploaded Made sure the changes show this time... -- 08:43, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (star) - For Approval
I hate this pattern... And I'd like somebody to tell me how to deal with this alignment thing, 'cause I don't know how EosOfTheDawn (talk) 15:53, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading. This is very good Eos =)  16:34, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

For the alignment all you do is  4:59 PM, Sat Oct 11, 2014

Re-up Thanks both of you! Just looked through some of my first chararts. Argh. --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 19:31, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think there would be any shading in the (our right) ear, because of the light source you're using. Great job on those stripes! 17:42, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Please blur stripes. Other than that, beautiful job! 21:34, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I might not explain this correctly...  Just a bit of nitpicking but, the white in the pupil in the dark side is brighter than the one on light side... perhaps change them to have the same shade of white. 00:02, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Eyes are fine. Guys, honestly, this nit-picking on the smallest stuff like the white in the eye has got to stop. Anyway, please blur/smudge the chest shading a bit. <span style="">00:54, 10/14/2014

can you define the facial and leg shading just a smidge? 01:25, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes just a little bit more to match the other images. 16:18, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading just a little bit? <span style="">1:31 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

I hate to say this but was Tallpoppy was never confirmed to be in StarClan? 08:59, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

In Tigerstar's leader ceremony she mistakenly shown as a StarClan cat,thats why she get a StarClan picture. 10:46, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Still working, will re-up sometime tomorrow. --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 19:38, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Grasspelt (Star) - For Approval
-sobs- More dying kittehs! 01:21, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define it on the paws. 06:57, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re Uploaded 14:22, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink, define the lightsource as the tail tells me it's coming from one direction and the rest of the body tells me another direction. And the body shading is leaking away from the lineart and where the tail is on the body. And wouldn't this have to be under the old post or at least the old post archived before this being reposted? Not sure, maybe someone can give second opinion? 14:31, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think Tiger's fine with it being here- she was told in chat to just make a new section and the old post would be archived. I also think that smudging the earpink is optional? But I reccomend it, especially on these blanks.

Define the earpink and the face shading. 15:04, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly brighten the earpink? It looks as though it blends completely and that there is no earpink at all. 21:36, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re Uploaded People on the chat said the lightsource and "leaking" line art was fine so I didn't change it. 23:07, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re re uploaded. I brightened up the earpink. 23:33, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

It would be shaded fully behind the tail. The shading shapes around it at the moment. At least shade that over. 00:49, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail? <span style="">00:56, 10/14/2014

Add and define the shading along the edges.-- 01:24, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading, too. 09:33, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

The ears are beautiful. Good job Tigerbird with brightening them up. I don't know if you could make it any better. 11:15, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smear the fur into the earpink a bit more. I also think there is receding shading on the side, around the tail tip. 16:02, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reupped I think smearing fur is optional but I did everything ya'll suggested. 00:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

It's not always optional. On some blanks it can be necessary, especially on these. Define the light on the paws and tail, and then lighten your shading a bit and blur it. I still see receding shading around the haunch and around the tail tip. 16:00, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Pretty sure it's optional tbh but anyhoo I don't think changes are showing (for anyone) <span style="">4:31 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014

It is not mandatory on any blank, Darkfrost. That's a very common and quite annoying PCA rumor among members that needs to stop. You can blur the ear pink (as I used to do and sometimes still do) and get the same desired results. Also, no, the changes don't seem to be showing for me either.

Re upped If the changes aren't showing, notify me at once. 22:13, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receding from the lineart on the stomach around where the tailtip is. <span style="">15:36 Sun Oct 19

Re upped 15:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (Ki) ~ For Approval
Breeze withdrew Tangle so... hehe. I was working on Tangle during my vacation cause I was bored ._. anywho, :3  02:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the shading and lighten it some. 07:03, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Also, would you like the file for the apprentice, so you can get the colors right? 08:09, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:50, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste everywhere, and IDK if its just me or the waste, but the lineart seems blurred? 13:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Waste will be the death of me xD 14:00, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Work on the texture a bit. <span style="">3:16 PM, Tue Oct 14, 2014

The file should be named Tangleburr.kit, not Tangleburr (KI). Brick  The Bite of '87  15:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed nameing and tried to texture it. 15:51, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail - she's so cute! 16:01, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you :3 16:11, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

This looks good. :) Just shift that chin shading down slightly so it's below the chin. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 16:32, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 16:39, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Ah hold up I had to fix some waste I didn't see Reups 16:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Tangleburr.kit. As for the image, try blurring the shading on the front paws a bit? Brick  The Bite of '87  18:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Renamed it correct finally sorry about that ugh I feel so n00bish... 19:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste around the feet. Also, I feel bad for pestering you so much about this, but I think it should be in lowercase, so .kit instead of .Kit   but i'm not sure because i'm not sure if the wikia is caps-sensitive or not so it might not matter. Brick  The Bite of '87  20:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't feel bad. I'd rater do it the right way than the wrong. 20:52, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws. This is pretty, Vixy. =) 15:56, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :D 19:48, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shapren the texture a bit to match the other images. Nice job! <span style="">1:30 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Reuploaded Thankes :DDD I'm so proud of her so far :3 13:47, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Expand your shading a bit. And smudge/blur your shading a little after that. 20:00, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 15:24, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Might just be my eyes, but I can see some waste around the head. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. 21:04, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded There was a tiny bit so I erased it. Thanks! ^^ Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 02:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Rainswept Flower (Ancient) ~ CBA
Woot~ <span style="">0:11 Wed Oct 15

Shade the inside of the ear a little. And I'm the first person to ever say this: define the tongue shading just a teeny bit. XD 21:42, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. lol <span style="">21:55 Wed Oct 15

Define the shading a little more? I know it's there, I'm just having a hard time seeing it. Damn I'm sounding like a broken record now aren't I <span style="">1:29 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Re-uploaded. lol no you're not. <span style="">20:52 Thu Oct 16

Define the shading on the tail just a bit? Unless it's super-defined and I just can't see it because of the stripes...

Hmm, I made it super dark there... If you want me to add some more, I can do that. <span style="">0:01 Fri Oct 17

Nah, another look shows that it's pretty good. You can add more if you want, but it's totally up to you.

If someone else agrees I can add some more shading. <span style="">23:14 Sat Oct 18

Looks good to me tbh. <span style="">5:32 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

I think it's fine too. No comments (other than rocket's) for a few days now, and I love this, so CBA? 14:25, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Stone Song (Ancient Tribe) ~ CBA
Meh, comments? 00:11, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I updated the blanks after you made this, so add whiskers (same for turtle tail below). Aaand define the head shading? 00:17, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

This looks awesome. :) The pupil looks a bit oddly shaped though - maybe round it a bit? And also, have a bit of light on the hind leg and the front right leg. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:29, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 00:36, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. I know it's there, but it looks a wee bit flat and I'm having issues seeing it.

re-up 18:18, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Can you brighten up the chest white a little bit? Maybe on --> side? <span style="">1:27 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Actually, that's not white. That's pale markings, so I think it's fine. 18:13, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the chest? It's the same with you and the StarClan blanks, you egg.

re-up I tried 19:48, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Not quite. The highlight on the chest is too high up as the jawline and head would cast a shadow there. Move it down quite a bit to where the fur fluffs out or remove it altogether. <span style="">3:27 Fri Oct 17 2014

re-up 18:19, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight.

re-up 17:20, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

This is purrrdy so re-CBA? 19:15, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly blend the white on the chest and paws if possible? 19:39, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

First of all, that's not white. That's pale markings. Second of all, I don't blend it, I smudge it. I think it's fine ;; 19:40, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, too. Re-CBA again? 19:43, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Half Moon (Ancient) - For Approval
meh. <span style="">00:52, 10/15/2014

Smooth out the shading on the tail and perhaps brighten up the entire left (our left) side of her, especially on the head. There's a lot of shading and that looks really gray.

Reuploaded <span style="">05:15, 10/18/2014

Smooth out the shading some more on the face. <span style="">23:13 Sat Oct 18

Graywing (WC) (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I've added to the table now. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and then define it everywhere. 08:36, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Also, the wiki is case-sensitive, the file should be named Graywing (WC).ancient.png, not Graywing_(WC).Ancient.png. 08:55, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have a ripped eartip? RaisuRice (talk) 14:12, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think so, because when he was in the tribe, he didn't have the ripped ear tip. Define the light on his forepaws. 14:31, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Try to give the shading more shape. You could use some shading on his shoulder, have it line the inner edge of his tail instead of just being in the tip, more shading higher up on the neck, and shading along his cheek. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:09, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I've redone the shading and renamed the file. I have already checked when Graywing got the ripped ear tip and it was in The First Battle I believe so he had no ripped ear tip as an ancient tribe member. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I know this sounds weird but define the tongue shading lmao. 21:45, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload this is a really new template XD --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:57, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. ikr xD 20:07, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I thought I'd change the eye as well. How he looked directly towards us looks a bit creepy, and his not a creepy cat. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:51, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading should be extended and up towards the back. It would kinda look like a "C", I think.

Reupload Like that? --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

The left front paw and chest seem very dark. Maybe lighten it up a bit? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 17:38, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the leg underneath the paw? <span style="">6:17 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

Dapplepelt (Ancient) - For Approval
I luv her pattern :3 19:53, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Very pretty :O Define the shadeing more  19:54, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thank you=) 18:06, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the patches a bit more? This is gorgeous. =) 04:04, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks :3 12:50, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading (if there is any). This is amazing. =) 02:50, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks:) 14:59, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Could you as more shading on the front left paw and then blur it? And maybe blue the white with the tortoiseshell on the back left paw(only back paw visible) 19:43, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Cloudspots (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Squee~! <span style="">10:26 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014

The white on the chest is not so smudged on the other images. Also, define the shading a bit, please. Another lovely charart, Rocket. 22:59, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

reup Redid the chest white. Thanks, Bluestar! <span style="">11:09 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014

his nose should be black, I think. 00:52, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading; he's lovely damn I wanted him 14:35, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

reup :) <span style="">8:49 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Smudge all the white like the chest? It seems a little odd that the chest is smudged one way and they rest of the white is smudged another. And personally I like the way the chest looks. =) this is pretty. 04:02, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

did I do it? frank wu frosteh! <span style="">6:28 PM, Sat Oct 18, 2014

Yo wehcom. I don't think changes are showing though, mind giving an external link? 20:34, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

I hate my computer so much. <span style="">4:33 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Shaded Moss (Ancient Tribe) ~ For Approval
This was fun =P 03:51, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Is that supposed to be textureing on the back leg? If so, could you bring it out more? It's kinda hard to see  10:25, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

This should be named File:Shaded Moss.ancient.png <span style="">12:59 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Define all the texture more, actually. 03:59, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'll just go and rename this for Breeze- she should know by now that I can do that and not take up extra image space.

This looks good. My suggestions would be, add more shading on the left side of the chest, add a highlight on the cheek, and recede the shading on the nose bridge and make the shading sharper there. The shading there's good, there should just be light on the nose as well. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:25, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just went ahead and remade him.-- 04:32, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, again. The computer I had the file on had windows reinstalled; so I had to remake him again. x.x-- 05:48, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lion's Roar (Ancient) - For Approval
- I never actually read the book that has him in it, so idk if he should have patchy fur or not, but it's easy to add 02:53, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

This looks really nice. :) The tail shading looks off with where the light's coming from. Maybe extend the light on each half of the tail. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:40, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Ooooooooh nice. Add the patchy fur- I read the first few chapters of The Sun Trail and he was described as old. 08:59, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

If he's older should he have a greying muzzle too? 11:47, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah I'd think so. Was he described with a graying muzzle? I have not read it either. Also would you smudge the stripes just a tad bit more? This is pretty. =) 14:34, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

He'd indeed need the graying muzzle. 15:17, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, personally, Frost 17:15, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:12, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Blend the stripes with the shading/golden color. Tabbies usually have blurred stripes. 19:46, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, no they don't? Scarlet has an image to match, so she can't just not match it. The stripes on his other images aren't blurred imho. They're fine as they are.

Shattered Ice (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Oh my gosh, I'm super happy with this. =) My bae Shattered Ice. I absolutely love him, and his pattern is so fun to do. I hope the file name is right. :/ Comment away~ 14:12, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge/whatever the shading on --> front arm and define the shading on the gray. Also, the file name is correct, yes.

Re-uploaded. For everyone's information for the future, I will only use blurred shading on a cat that has white fur, like now. The rest of the time will be smudged shading, most likely. And good. 17:10, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 11:13, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I won't define it anymore on the white unless you point out a specific place, as I'll probably be told to blur it anyway. 15:10, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the chest.

Re-uploaded. 19:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Add some more depth to the shading. I can barely see it at all, mainly on the gray. 02:49, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I literally cannot define it anymore on the gray now, as the shading is now at its darkest. I added depth to the shading on the white. 13:01, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Then add another layer of shading and play around with it, because I don't think the shading on the white on the paws/front arms/legs/whatever you call it is dark enough.

Snow Hare (AT) ~ For Approval
meh. <span style="">16:06 Fri Oct 17

Lighten the shading it's very dark for a white cat 16:12, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reups! <span style="">16:33 Fri Oct 17

It's still pretty dark, turning the white really gray and dark. Perhaps use a tinted shading and put it on lighter? 16:49, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

No its not too dark. You just need to expand the highlight on the head. <span style="">16:52 Fri Oct 17 2014

Define the nose pink. <span style="">11:03 PM, Fri Oct 17, 2014

Reups I don't know if changes are showing. <span style="">10:55 Sat Oct 18

I don't know if it's just my tablet, but the shading looks a bit pink tinted. Perhaps put the layer on multiply or tint it with a dark color? 17:12, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

The elder has that pinkish tint, so this is just matching with that. <span style="">17:20 Sat Oct 18

The shading is receding from the lineart on the tail, <<<< foreleg, neck and head. Also, adding on to what Amber said, shading doesn't have to be black. Sometimes, black shading can throw off the color of some pelts, so we just choose a different color. <span style="">18:58 Sat Oct 18

Reups<span style="">11:15 Sun Oct 19

The elder's image has lighter shading. Perhaps lighten up the shading to match the elder's image? 15:03, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Shading darkness does not have to match across images. The shading is fine as is. <span style="">5:26 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Actually, I think the shading could be lightened a tad on the tail, head, <<<<shoulder and back of neck. Also, flip the shading on the tail, because it's going against your light source. <span style="">18:47 Sun Oct 19

Reups Changes could be showing... IDK <span style="">18:56 Mon Oct 20

Lovely; it could just be my kindle, but I think there's a little bit of receeding shading on the fluff on the back of her neck. 19:00, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Thank you :) <span style="">19:05 Mon Oct 20

Define the earpink on both ears. The eyes are beautiful. 19:48, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Ancient) - For Approval
huzzah black kitties.

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading because I didn't like the first one.

Pretty! I can't see the texture through the shading. Perhaps define it a little in the shaded areas? Or lighten the shading a tad? 16:47, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, well, it appears to be like that on his other images, and many other black cats just like him, so I'm not sure I want to define it too much- it'll start to look overly paintbrushy and just icky. Since it's a black cat, and I shaded with black, and the texture is black, they're naturally going to clash with each other. I'd rather not touch it for now, unless someone has another alternative suggestion.

Lighten the shading and the texure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:26, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Weeeee I love black cats.

Shading everywhere but the tail looks really sharp. Smudge it a bit? <span style="">01:46, 10/19/2014

Of course it's gonna look sharp, otherwise you're not going to be able to see it with this color. Re-uploaded anyways and if I get told to define the shading, I'm just reverting it.

The tail is smudge pretty well and I can still tell it has shading. I'm saying it's //too// sharp. It could use a bit of smudging around the edges. <span style="">01:52, 10/19/2014

I reuploaded already and I don't think the changes are showing, so I'll reupload again. If it's not sharp, you're not gonna be able to see it, and the tail has a different layer of shading compared to the rest of the image since it's so thin. As for the shading itself, it's not smudged, so there's no way the tail shading is smudged- I blurred it this time since I don't like smudging on black cats.

Shadow (AT) ~ For Approval
My first ancient, but I hate this shading; comments? 18:08, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Beautiful, Sorrel. The shading seems to edge away from the lineart in places, particularly on the stomache. Also, darken her up a bit, as she looks more dark gray than black. 19:59, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

The file name should actually be Shadow.ancient.png, so I'm just gonna go ahead and change that for you. I didn't get a chance to tell you in chat about that.

Reups changes are here. thank you both 21:59, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

But I like ancient cat shading... maybe lighten the shading around the stomach slightly? 11:10, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes not showing yet 14:54, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Hawk Swoop (Ancient Tribe) - For Approval
comments? I haven't done these for a while — <span style="">Sun Oct 19 00:37

This looks great. :) Maybe a bit more shading on that left (higher) paw, and that nose and muzzle? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:28, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

reups thank you c: — <span style="">Sun Oct 19 01:47

Wow it's beautiful. Could you possibly blur the stripes? 19:51, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes aren't really blurred on her other images, which this one has to match.

Silver Frost (Ancient) ~ For Evaluation
Well this is it i love her eyes.Warriorsbutterminecraft (talk) 16:46, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

The patches need to match her other images and she shading looks a bit blotchy and sourceless. Also the file needs to be named File:Silver Frost.ancient.png, so please fix that. <span style="">5:29 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Reups.--Warriorsbutterminecraft (talk) 02:41, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

The patches should be solid not smudged. Are changes showing? Try uploading to ezimba.com. <span style="">5:37 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

Crop the space around the image so that it is more of similar size to the other images. 17:40, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Sandypaw (App) - For Approval
I actually did this a while back, just to practice texture. Now that Sandypaw's gender has been confirmed, it fit. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:33, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Finally! Gorgeous! Maybe just define the light on the legs? 18:48, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. :) Defined. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 19:16, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Bright Stream (Ancient tribe) ~ For Approval
Soooo I used Jayie's shading tutorial to make this, so neither smudged nor blurred shading this time, whoo. Anyway, colors shouldnt need shifting any as theyre taken directly from the starclanners file. 19:10, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Try to blur the stripes on the tail. And which way is the light coming from? 19:54, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

'''The light is coming from our right, and and the top. ''' 19:59, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (Ancient) ~ For Approval
eh idk comments? 20:14, October 20, 2014 (UTC)