Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Leafstar (Q) - Redone
OA was me (fun fact, this was my second ever approved image!) I am so glad I could kill this. I redid the stripes and the cream, and I tinted the shading, so hopefully it matches better. Oh, and the markings aren't as blurred as they were last time, though I think some of the stripes may need blurred more, not sure, gimmie your opinion. I hate stretching out stripes on queens ._. 18:00, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 8D 18:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty <3 Blur the earpink :3 19:47, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful! Define the shading a tad. 01:31, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so glad that you guys agree that this looks better :) 02:50, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

This is georgious. <3 Possibly make the shading more brown and for the sake of matching the other images, make the cream that's shaded... more creamy? oWo 09:14, 01, 08, 2012

The cream's fine. It's just shading... 09:59, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

The thing is...the shading is tinted. Paleh (I think) who made her leader image, I could ask for the hex code of the shading tint since that's kind of difficult to pick off of the image :P At least the shading isn't black like last time. 16:53, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck a little. Breeze whisker  20:28, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

What the heck? I tried to post like two times, and I thought it wen through... 0.o anyways, the shading color is just the base brown color set to multiply. 00:25, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be pale gray and shading needed to be defined. OA was Goldencloud with tweaks made by Appledash and Wildfire. I don't know if I made her too dark or not, so yeah... And something weird happened with the earpink, so I'll fix that soon :P Comments? 20:02, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the eyes just a bit? They seem darker compared to her kittypet image.

Maybe blur the earpink a bit. 20:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

She already said she'd fix the ear pink, Bluestar. There's no need to remind her.

Lighten the shading. 22:55, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the haunch and belly "hightlight" into the pelt more. 14:15, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the eyes and the shading, fixed the earpink and blended the belly and haunch highlights, 16:01, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and blur the belly highlight and lighten the haunch shading. Also, define the head shading. 17:00, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you change the ear pink color to #7D5050? I had to fix it on the kittypet and warrior, that way you could see it better.

Reuploaded Changed the earpink and I dulled+blurred the belly highlight more, but I think the shading and the rest of the highlights are fine. But if anyone else agrees, I'll make the changes. ^^ 16:18, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste by the belly and backside. 20:36, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got rid of all the waste and I filled in her nose. 16:47, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the body shading and highlights a bit more. 06:56, 04, 08, 2012

Reuploaded Blended the body shading and highlights as best as I could e.e  14:40, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

And there's a bit of waste by the belly and foot. 06:02, 07, 08, 2012

Reuploaded Ugh, thought I got rid of that already >.<  13:07, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Troutclaw (E) ~ Tweaked
I tweaked him to have a matted head. ihatelineartedits   07:46, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you fix that ear pink and make it stand out a little less? Perhaps blur it?

Okay nobody eat me I was gone for the vote, but could the stripes on this be redone, maybe? They aren't realistic at all and they look kinda overblurred. .-. Breeze  whisker  03:26, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Bah, I'm withdrawing. 04:13, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Taking over, Re-uploaded 04:38 Sun Aug 5

Thin out the lineart and fix the ear pink. Still looks like a blob. x.x

Can you also possibly define the shading? 14:37, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 09:59 Tue Aug 7

Runningstorm (W) ~ Tweaked
Ickickick. -hides- I haven't actually done a warrior in a long time xD Anyways, I darkened the shading and made the earpink less red. OA was me. this fails. 10:58, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading, and define the pale chest. 11:02, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink and define the light source. I <3333 your tabbies, Splook  11:19, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Well, I'm glad you like my unrealistic messes <3   14:43, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pale chest, smooth out the shading, lighten the shading and blur it. 14:52, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. 20:46, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:38, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blurr the chest a little, and, if possible, define the stripes a tad? Breeze whisker  21:21, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Shadepelt (E) ~ Tweaked
Blurred the shading. OA is Breezey.

Blur the "highlight"/shading a bit more. 03:19, 05, 08, 2012

I'm not entirely sure I can do that. I think it's fine, but if others want me to do it, I will.

(I think the shading is fine too, it looks pretty cool) Can you center the earpink? 14:41, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Aafnkajnfskdgn, I hate ear pink on elders. x.x Re-uploaded.

Can you define the earpink a tad? xD *shrinks away*  14:44, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, only because I despise this rank so much...but if someone else agrees, sure. 8D

Yeah, it does need a little defining. :P Breeze  whisker  01:40, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Fernpelt (A) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading. The most recent OA was Scarlet. 20:31, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shaing on her haunch and forearm. 23:34, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh wow it doesn't even look like I blurred it. >_> 23:49, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit more. 07:00, 06, 08, 2012

Reuploaded Haunch shading, y u be difficult? 16:12, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Fernpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading like the apprentice. As stated above, the most recent OA was Scarlet. 20:31, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom edge of the ear pink, please.

Enlarge the shoulder and haunch "highlights". 20:36, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:53, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the shoulder one more and make them more of a natural circle. 22:56, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading too. 14:02, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

And maybe lighten it a little. Breeze whisker  21:20, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:03, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little more. 07:05, 06, 08, 2012

Reuploaded 16:09, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (WC) (W) ~ Withdrawn
Multiple issues. Oa was Ashshadow with a redo by me. 04:12, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

I love this image, and don't get me wrong but...Did this image really need to get redone? The last version was completely fine to me - no issues. It could've just been tweaked to look more gray, less blue. 06:54, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. (This goes for the medicine cat, as well) 14:56, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I agree with Stoney. The spots were fine and the base pelt could have just been a simple tweaked color. However, in my absense, I assume it got three yes votes so *shrug* 18:26, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, guys. It got three yay votes. It wasn't immediately archived afterwards, giving other users ample time to comment if they disagreed with the voting. It is how it is.

I think the earpink looks fine. If anything, it needs to be blurred. Breeze whisker  21:19, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:12, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define/Darken the shading a tad. 14:41, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded No more defining plz kthxbye 07:14, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ima withdraw this one to work on Cherrytail. 08:08, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (WC) (MC) ~ Redone
Same as the warrior. Oa was Nightfall101 with a redo by me. Everything is the same as the warrior except the herbs. 04:12, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

I love this image, and don't get me wrong but...Did this image really need to get redone? The last version was completely fine to me - no issues. It could've just been tweaked to look more gray, less blue. 06:54, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:12, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad? 14:42, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  07:14, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and it had shading and earpink issues. I also made the image darker, and I prefer not to lighten the shading. 06:57, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading just little bit.

Define the earpink on her left ear. (Our right) 17:53, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

Henry (KP) - Tweaked
All I did was add some more shading, but I don't think the changes are showing. In the next upload, I'll define the ear pink and add depth to the eye. 15:03, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading to the far left.. It looks black. 16:05, August 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front leg 05:27, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP) - Redone
Redone to match warrior and apprentice. Now that I look at it again the markings are slightly off in color, I'll fix that in the next upload. Comments? Breeze whisker  01:38, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in her eyes a bit and can you texturize the edges a bit more? I found a mottle-y type of brush can really help make the patches look like the warrior, along with smudges. 02:19, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 05:22, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a bit derpy eyed. Maybe thicken the pupils by a pixel. 09:52, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Defined shading, earpink and eye depth. OA was Mistystar139. Comments? 10:16 Tue Aug 7