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Swallowtail (RC) (E) - Redone
I have permision now, don't worry :). Original artist was Bramble, shading needed tweaking and stripes needed to match the warriors :D . Comments?  Elorisa   19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the smudges :3 20:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I personally like the smudges. The make him look furry, which is brilliant to me. I think you should just enlarge the ear-pink a bit. 20:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like the smudges too, Shellheart. They're just a little sharp. 21:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say leave 'em as they are. They look good to me :3 23:55 Sun Oct 23

Reuploaded~better?  Elorisa   02:02, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the reddish parts on her haunch and her leg? 17:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the ear-pink curve round more at the top. 08:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I didn't see any reddish parts...:/  Elorisa   20:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights looks blotchy. 22:52, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Splashheart (W) - Redone
I figured since I did his leader, I should do his warrior as well. OA was Bramble, I redid it and changed the colour to match the leader's. 01:58, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. 02:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading/highlights. 02:03 Mon Oct 24

Re-uploaded. Done, but it's not showing ._. Just go to the file page if it doesn't show up. 02:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading or tone down the highlights. Move the tail highlight away from the base of the tail; it kinda looks like a stripe. Center the ear-pink, make it a tad smaller and brighten it. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:34, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:39, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the highlight on the tail. 22:59, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:35, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

If you're using highlights, brighten the one on the face, or dull the other ones to match. Enlarge the haunch highlight/thin out the haunch shading and blur all shading and/or highlights. 02:50 Tue Oct 25

Re-uploaded. 19:49, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink seems to fill the entire ear. Make it a bit smaller. 21:56, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and the haunch highlight (just using the word highlight as a metaphor for the lighter areas). 17:17, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more towrds the center of the ear. 23:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (W) - Redone
Well... I tried... Redid her stripes to match Silverstream's. OA was me. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shoulder highlight bigger, blur the haunch highlight, and change the image size so it's only as big as the cat—no extra spaces on the outside. 03:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion, no highlights in this one, but I moved the shading. Forgive me if I'm sounding blunt, but I have no idea what you're talking about with the image size. I used the same sized blanks as everything else. Could you explain further? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:32, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

All right, I'm very OCD about this (I always was, don't worry), but look at Splashheart's warrior image. There is no extra space above his nose/ears, below his feet, or next to his tail. What I'm saying is just crop the image until the image size only extends as far as where the black ends. Does that make any sense to you? 03:38, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dull and enlarge the earpink. 04:21 Mon Oct 24

Better. Can you make the stripes a tad bdarker? Blpur the highlights. 20:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the muzzle and above the haunch. 21:20, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripes? Silverstream's stripes seem darker. 22:32, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion. Because I'm such a derp, I have no idea how to fix that. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really see the haunch highlight, can you brighten it a tad? (Sozzle if there ain't highlights.) Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 20:18, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, but you could resize the image using MS paint if you have windows. Perhaps lighten the shading on the face it seems a bit...er, flat...? And of course it looks amazing. ;P 00:47, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I checked the image size and it's exactly the same size as the warrior blanks. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Enlarge the earpink and define it. 22:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste 06:11 Fri Oct 28

Blur the haunch highlight a little more. 23:37, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Scourge (ki) - Tweaked
NOW I UNDERSTAND. Yes..sorry.. I dont know that.... then I putting it agin... sorry agin!!!! I really dont know Im allowen to have only 2 charart each.Leaf-storm,19:32,October 24,2011 (UTC)

Make the blurring on his white paw less blotchy, and please try and make an effort with spelling. In addition, try to avoid capitals and excessive exclamation marks. 21:40, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the left earpink, and write the OA and why it was tweaked. 22:53, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mosswisker&Stealthfire is OA and reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:48,October 25,2011 (UTC)

And I tweaked it becuase he have the white paw on the wrong side Leaf-storm,16:50,October 25,2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 22:54, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur her spots more. 20:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:58, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh how I love xcf. files >:3 22:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little too dark, or too yellow. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 00:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I took all the colors from her leader image.... 00:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure you took them from the right spots of the image though. The spots look a little green... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail needs highlights. 22:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are not mandatory. 04:00, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think what you meant to say, Dapplecloud, was that the tail needs an area where there isn't any shading. Am I correct? 06:13 Fri Oct 28

Reuploaded Eh... -- 20:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (W)- Tweaked
OA was SparrowWing, and Bracken and I tweaked it later on. The shading was blotchy, so I re-did that. :3 03:06, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe re-do the stripes? I'm not sure, they're just a...little...eh to me. 12:37, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, Icey. There's no need to tweak them. In fact, I've always been fond of this image. Since you're the last one to tweak it, can you please fix the ear pink? It looks too pointy. Blur it a bit, if you don't mind. 00:23, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but there's something odd about this image. I'm not sure, but maybe you could blur the shading a bit more? 20:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and darken it. 23:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with you Icestorm. It just looks a little off to me, I don't even know what it is. Maybe blur the highlights (meaning the lighter areas)? 20:04, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (W) - Redone
Even though this is a total redo from his old warrior image, this is actually a tweak from his deputy image. I pasted the blank on top of it (along with fiddling around some) and viola, consistancy! OA not sure about, but we've got Echostar, Quailflightthecat and Ashshadow. There shouldn't be a whole lot that needs to be done, however, comments for improvement? 04:29, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The pale part of his belly needs to come to a point aimed at his shoulder. 04:34, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I looks like theres a piece of lineart missing on the back foot 22:26, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and I don't think you meant missing. There was an an extra piece but no missing piece. Stupid me forgot to save the layers  16:44, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Applefur (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Believe it or not this is actually a tweak, since I did everything over the original image. Anyway, OA was Sandstar and the mottles needed to be redone. 10:15, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

It's so pretty~:3. Smudge the dapples a tad to give them a slight furry-esque look, like the warror image~  Elorisa   20:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and the mottles. 23:24, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 09:41, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) ~ Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this. It needed to be more ginger colored and the shading needed to be smoothed out more, so that's what I did. I tried to match the previous pattern of stripes the best I could because I thought it looked nice. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Moonleaf to add stripes, I believe. Comments? 18:07, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Clear up the waste around him and redden the earpink a little. :3 19:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I kinda wanted to do this one, but oh well :). Darken the tail shading. 19:58, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading thinner, lighten and define it. 20:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I like this! darken the shading on the tail Guradian22:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Unless the changes aren't showing, I still see tons of waste. Moreso around his head and back. 22:37, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Heathertail (W) - Tweaked
Dumb me. I uploaded it before I put this up, but here we go. I added shading. Comments?

22:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I kinda liked the old eye though :(. Anyways, move the earpink a little towards the ear. 22:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The old eye had no pupil. I can't move the ear pink, I don't have the ear pink layer. 22:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

You could still try though... 23:16, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

But I can't. 23:20, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Eye looks fine to me XD who cares if you changed it? Its not like you redid the whole image. Speaking of which, lighten the shading on the higher part of its back - 23:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: HER. xD 23:40, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the eyelash missing a pixel ate the tip? I know it's a minor thing, but still. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:35, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

What? xD 22:14, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Icebrain. There's a pixel missing. You might want to go fix that, as she looks like a tom now. xD 22:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: SORRY CLOUDBRAIN. 23:43, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Avoid caps. Define the ear pink. 23:44, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'm only supposed to change the shading. Not the ear pink. 23:46, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

... But you changed the ear pink from the original. They look nothing a like. 23:49, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

LOLFAIL. But even if I did changed it, it's fine. 23:50, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Larksong (E) - Tweaked
The charat needed lighter shading and OA was Echomist. 23:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the haunch shading? 20:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think the lineart on her forehead it lightened. Please fix that ^^ --Guradian109822:38, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the haunch highlight or darken the other two. 23:46, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsetail (P3) (W) - Tweaked
Please don't tell me to change the eye, it's fine how it is. Original artist was Flamingomom3/Hawktalon, and it needed to have shading and the patches needed to be blended better (I didn't really understand what 'blended' meant, so I just blurred them). 23:15, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, define the patches, you can barely tell they're there anymore, and how is the eye fine? It looks like it doesn't have a pupil. It should be fixed. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:23, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Did you fix the eyes? It doesn't look like it. And could you make the white whiter? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. 23:27, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Whats up with people wanting the eye fixed? It not a major thing. I think its perfectly fine, and darken the shading on the right ear 23:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just hope people don't fight over it, though. ;_; 23:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, I can't see it., Please change it. 23:33, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

There are tons of different eye styles; does it really matter? Elorisa  23:45, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

It does if you can't see the pupil. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I remember going through this discussion when my Leafstorm was approved...xD. Someone (I think it was Oblivion or someone who was a lead back then...xD) said it doesn't matter what eye style you use; it's the artist's choice. Elorisa  01:27, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's a pupil. Get over it, guys. Every artist has their own style and way of doing things. The eye is fine how it is. 01:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I did say that xD We actually had a huge discussion about this, and it was agreed that this eye style is just as good as the other one. An eye's an eye, it doesn't really matter what it looks like as long as it's the right colour. 19:17, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) ~ Redone
OA was probably Sandy..then tweaked by Nightshine and Mousetalon. I sat here for an hour trying to fix the other image, and it was impossible. Changes might not be showing... 00:08, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 23:47, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shdaing's fine, Iceheart. You can see it perfectly. I don't understand why she need sto darken it. 23:49, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Personally i cant see any on the upper body. The haunch is fine but the neck and shoulder need to be darkened. 23:50, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki)- Tweaked
Ugh. That's all I'll say, except the OA is Shimmerpool and I think tweaked or summin by Iceheart. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 08:05, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a whole lot; I can barely see it. 19:14, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Q) - Tweaked
Orginal artist was Hawkfire, shading and highlights needed tweaking. Comments? Elorisa  19:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The muzzle looks white because of the highlight, could you please fix that. And it looks like there's blurred lineart now. It wasn't listed for that I know, but I don't remember it being there before you tweaked it, so I think you should fix it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Flowerstar - Tweaked
OA=Dawnfeather & i burned in the stripes. Soooo comments? 22:29, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the tail a bit? This looks cool! 22:35, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the 'M' on her forhead as well. Nice job --Guradian109822:37, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:42, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the patches more ginger? They look brown to me. 22:43, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnstripe(W) - tweaked
Made her a shorthair, OA=Darkhallows 23:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (W)~ Redone
OA was Nightshine and it needed to be brown and nobody likes triangle tabbies so heres this. 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)