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Fringepaw (Lo) - CBA
I don't... know how I feel about this. All colors are from the other image I did. Her description got swapped, so this is the main one now. ​​

Can you define the shading on the white? Primarily the face, haunch and shoulder. —

It's a bit hard to tell with the shading you got here, but if not, there should be some white on the chest. I also think the front paw furthest from us should be predominantly white, and there should be white above the paw on the front limb closest to us. And, idk, try fiddling around with more white patches and splatters? Maybe that'll make it match better. 03:59, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Echo, where you're asking me to define the shading on the white (the haunch and shoulder specifically), there isn't going to be any due to the source I'm using (I use this one on almost all of my loner images), but I can try on the face. I'll reupload in a little bit. The fact I forgot how I made the apprentice image isn't helping any. ​

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Slightly less crappy. ​

That eye makes her look surprised, lol. I still can't see the facial shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:30, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Because most of the shading for this image in particular is on the top of the head, which is where the pattern is. I can't really just swap the head shading without ruining the source (and thus getting told to change it again). ​​​​​​​

It looks better now to me, at least on my phone, whereas on my PC the white seemed super stark to the rest of the body. I might have been nitpicky there, sorry! It looks good now. —

On the apprentice image, the white on the tail tip seems to be a little bit more extended, if that's the right word. 17:45, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean? They're about the same length...? I have a layer with the colors before I smudge and add white flecks, and they're about the same on both images. Unless I'm totally missing what you're saying here...? ​​​​​​

On the apprentice image, the white seems to reach to almost the midpoint of the tail. Not quite, but close. 18:19, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, no, it doesn't. This is what the colors look like before I smudge and add flecks. It just happens to be that there are a bit more flecks/whiter areas on that image than this one. I'll see what I can do after I get back. ​​​​​

Re-uploaded. Does this look better? ​​​​​

Looking great Jayce! The shading could be smoothed out on the legs and there should be a teensy bit of shading on the earpink.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:37, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

What legs? There are countless other images that have even rougher shading, and also ones that lack shading on the earpink. I'm sorry, but I honestly think it's fine. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

Yes the tail looks a lot better! It just needed a little more white. 22:39, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the two front paws and the back paw facing towards us? —

Re-uploaded. Fiddled with the shading too. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

CBA? 00:08, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt W) - For Approval
I actually enjoyed this one. 02:17 Fri Dec 7

Can you define leg shading please. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:23, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

The yellow highlight on her shoulder is really kind of off-putting. Could you reduce it some? 02:28, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

That's actually a marking from the original image. It was color picked, but I'll see what I can do. 02:32 Fri Dec 7

This is utterly stunning. While I like the yellow highlight, you should desaturate it a bit, as Hawkey said it's really off putting. —

I think it's fine? Considering Sun said it was color picked from the image. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:35, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Nah going to agree with Hawk and Echo. That does look off to me. There are some unfilled pixels on the haunch. Also Sunjaw Fox said you can have Pebbleshine back, she doesn't have time to work on her anymore.Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:37, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Off-putting or not, they are shown on the image Sun is matching, so to remove them wouldn't make any sense. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

I never said to remove them. Only to reduce/desaturate them. 03:43, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I don't want it gone, I think it should be a bit more brown than yellow. Also Potato, Pebbleshine will be figured out, she'll get her image eventually and people will do it when they get around to it. ^^ —

The color from the image isn't brown, it's a golden color. That's what Sun was going for. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:53, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's fine, other than that maybe define the head shading? I love this Malina457 (talk) 13:19, December 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The front paws need shading to be defined as well. —

The brown does look out of place, and I agree with Mink about reducing or desaturating them. 19:32, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded My tablet driver got screwed up, so this is all I am able to do right now. I am not going to mess with the golden-brown further. I took all of the colors directly from the image this is based on, so it matches. 20:28 Sun Dec 9

Palebird (T) - CBA
lazy job ill fix up the belly and shoulder shading later 07:40, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

This is so gorgeous, I believe the image should be named File:Palebird.tunneler.png? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 10:37, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Mink, the name is already correct.Heyoitpotater (talk) 14:13, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, the file name is technically incorrect, Potato. The current file is Palebird.'tunneller`.png. Tunneler, with two ls than one which is what the tunnelers have been being uploaded with. SquidwardPlays 15:25, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

It's true, tunneler is misspelled in the file name. David will change it when they can. ^^ Otherwise, this image is really great! 15:45, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

It's not mispelt, perse. It's just using a different spelling- this is akin to color and colour. I've fixed the spelling for the filename to go with what we use, though. ​​​​​​​​​

Oh my apologies. I was about to leave for school and I thought the wording was correct. Define the shading on --> that leg please.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:33, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and there's a teensy speck of waste on the left hind leg.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:10, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded I couldnt see any waste 19:13, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? Amazing as always, david. 00:09, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry I didn't get this sooner, gah. But this is the waste Potato was talking about. —

Waste does not affect the quality of the image, so the CBA can continue from where Vec started it. ​​

i wont bother putting a reuploaded, but its gone now. thanks for pointing it out, and also thanks vec 03:44, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (CG) ~ Withdrawn
okay, this is okay but the shading I am very iffy about. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 11:54, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Shouldn’t the tail look more tuft-like akin to the other images? Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:12, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, it should. Look at File:Rock (CG).rogue.png for reference.Heyoitpotater (talk) 14:17, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading/light on the front legs. 14:20, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I like this image, but I think the mud is overwhelming his actual pelt color. The base color needs to be darker (it looks more dark gray right now) and the mud needs to be toned down a bit. 15:47, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I showed the lineart to Jayce since they did do the original CG, they said that the tail looked fine good when I did..? Also these colors were colorpicked from the original CG, it just seems like its lighter since most of the back doesn't have shading. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 17:03, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

The base is #131313, just for reference. Also, could you darken the shading a tad? ​​​​​

I looked at Rock's other images, and there's really a stark difference in the pelt darkness compared to this image. 17:38, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Can you lessen the mud? Or add more depth to it, since it seems like flatly smeared. —

It's the same as on his orginal CG? Wouldn't that change the color by lessening it. I've seen other muds where it thrown on and smudged. I'll fiddle around with it though. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 18:30, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

The CG had it in patches; this isn't in patches, and you can barely tell the base from all the mud. Please lessen it. You've been asked by multiple people now, and this is bordering on refusal to perform the tweaks to your images that are suggested. Your images can be declined if you constantly refuse to make any changes to your image. ​​​​​

Besides the mud, Mink, there's the tail issue mentioned above by Darkshadow and I.Potato Flakin (talk) 19:42, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, Potato I know. I haven't had the chance for an upload. Jayce, I wasn't refusing to fix the patches. I said I'd fiddle with it when I upload next. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 00:52, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Withdrawn, my mouse broke and I can't do much of anything without a mouse. Minkclaw You're my person 15:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

This counts as a redo so anyone without a second reservation can claim it. 18:56, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

I'd like to do it. 18:57, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Stoneteller (OotS) (CG) ~ CBA


This looks awesome! Define the shading on the lower chest. It kind of blends in with the top of the foreleg furthest from us, and it's hard to tell where the chest ends and foreleg begins. 18:59, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 20:01, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Is it me, or is he cross-eyed? *prepares to get shot*Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:37, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I mean, not really. It looks fine to me —

Can you define the shading on the tail and the foot under the tail as well. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:54, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 02:38, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This is lovely! Can you maybe define the mud a bit more? It blends in super well with the black. —

Reups Thank you! :D 05:21, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Well done. 02:42, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Woollytail (T) - For Approval
21:56, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more. This looks great, Icy! 21:57, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink is fine imho. Define the shading everywhere.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:35, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the texture? It’s super dark in his other images. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 22:38, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I think the shading looks good, Potato? It's certainly dark enough on the main body. Any darker, it would be too dark imo. But I do believe it could be defined a bit on the hind leg furthest from us and add some more shading to the neck. 00:46, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Also, I believe the white on the paws extends up the back portion of the leg a bit in the warrior. 00:50, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, I agree with Hawkey about the ear pink; this seems to be an issue the entire set has... I can't see the ear pink at all. ​​​​

If it were a bit lighter it would be visible, but since it's so dark and close to grey it's difficult to see. —

Re-uploaded: 18:29, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

The white still needs to extend up a bit onto the leg like how it's shown on the warrior. 00:08, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Can I ask what you mean? I think they extend the same now... 00:16, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

What Vec means is on the warrior pixel there's a very thin strip of white running up --> that hind leg. Not sure if you can see it because it has shading on it, but it's there.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:27, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth?

Re-uploaded: 19:55, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe these will help with what I'm trying say; sorry I'm so bad at it. ;u; The warrior has white here, circled in red, so the tunneler should look something like this. 20:44, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Mistmouse (T) - For Approval
I chose her cause I love her name :D 23:03, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:08, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Could you be more specific as to where the shading needs to be defined? It looks pretty defined to me. 23:13, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Pretty much everywhere.Heyoitpotater (talk) 00:06, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

imo I think it's defined enough, but I do feel like the shading could be expanded on the shoulder, neck and top portion of the tail. 00:44, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reups. Played around with the definition of the shading as well. 03:23, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Comparing this to the warrior (the first in this set for colors, stripe softness, ect), it appears that the warrior's stripes are a bit softer than how you have them... which kinda makes me want to go nominate that queen, since the stripes really don't match...and it's sort of giving off a bit of a misleading air when it comes to matching. ​​​​​​​​​​

Oh no. I matched my stripes to the queen because I was working with the same side, while the warrior displayed the opposite side. 03:32, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

I also want to point out that this situation also happened with Storm Pelt, and in that case you told me to match the charart that displays the side I'm working on. 03:36, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe soften the stripes a bit or lower their opacity? In terms of matching the position, they seem fine since Hawkey was matching the queen's side. —

The stripes match fine to me. Can you make the earpink a tad more visible? 19:26, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this a little better? I color picked the ear pink from the warrior, but the color itself kinda blends into the base color. 04:32, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Flailfoot (T) ~ For Approval
First charart. I'll fix the earpink to match the warrior and elder after I post this. --- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   04:45, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded The earpink is fixed. Sliver   pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   04:49, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This is really cute!! Can you define the shading a bit better and darken it? —

Reuploaded I darkened it? I hope you can see a difference ^-^ -- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   04:57, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Congrats on your first charart! You sure picked a tough one; black cats are notorious for being difficult to shade. But I believe you can do it. :) The shading is still hardly visible, and you're going to have to darken it more. 05:13, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! I can't tabby well so I chose Flailfoot :) How's the shading? -- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   05:19, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This is lovely for a first! I can barely see the earpink- Potato Flakin

Oh whoops, that was Potato up there. That's an old username, and I can't find the previous one. I'll try to fix that.-Potato Flakin

Reuploaded The earpink should be slightly more visible now. -- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   05:33, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found something wrong with the nose. -- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   05:45, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Black cats are my favorite to do ;; define the leg shading on <-- back leg Malina457 (talk) 14:39, December 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded This looks dark 15:14, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I forgot the nose again. 15:14, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't like how light the shading looks so I darkened it. 15:36, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This looks over 50% done, so I will be changing the title to "for approval" and bumping you up to an apprentice. 19:28, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Appledash! Also, I’m on mobile so it’s hard to edit. -- 19:33, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (Alt T) ~ For Approval
Look how disgusting that paw is ugh. 05:11, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This is gorgeous, I love the shading! Can you shapen the paw a bit more to look more broken, if that makes any sense? It looks like it's being held up in the air like the front paw instead of broken. —

Got my username back. If you need reference for the leg, look at File:Lilywhisker.df.png.Heyoitpotater (talk) 05:38, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Still not happy with it but hooray 05:43, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a little? 19:29, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 02:44, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Whiteberry (T) ~ CBA


16:01, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

So lovely <3 Can you define the shading more, especially on the stomach and chest? 16:04, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Is the nose filled in?Heyoitpotater (talk) 19:31, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

It is, I think it's just very light. —

Re-uploaded.

20:41, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 15:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Sandgorse (T)~ For Approval
I dont know if I like the fluff tuffs or not. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:12, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Friendly reminder not to thumb your images! Reduce the pale parts on the tail, belly, chest and muzzle. For the first three, the paler parts are very thin and don't creep onto the main body very much. On the muzzle, reduce the pale parts so it doesn't reach the eyes or cheeks. 20:38, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink looks really light compared to his other images. Color pick from either of his previous images to get the correct color. Also, in addition to what Vec said, there needs to be some more stripes. 20:47, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

This needs to be renamed File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png. You are missing a letter in the file name. Also, put some bare skin on where the tufts are, being described with patchy fur means missing fur, which shows skin. If you need reference look at File:Sandgorse.star.png.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, the "T" in tunneler doesn't need to be uppercase.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:59, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re~Up Okay, and I want to know, should I edit the positioning and or the shape of the fluff tuffs? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:11, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

You probably should try to match the StarClan one. Did you dethumb this? Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Also, this looks a little darker than his other images. Maybe ask Jayce for the base color if you get stuck.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:21, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Potato Flakin, I am trying to make it mach the warrior blank, because that is how it works, do the first one, not a later one, and it is dethumbed <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:42, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

In regards to the fur tufts, make them a little shorter and smaller, if that makes sense. More, you know, tufty ^^ Also, add a little pink (the ear pink color is fine) right underneath each tuft to mimic the exposed skin. 21:45, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re~Oops, fixed the fluff tuffs, I seem to like them now, and lowered the shading opacsity <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:00, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

I did both of Sandgorse's other images. The StarClan has more of the side you need to match than the warrior does.