Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Rosetail ~ Silver Nomination
I've been working on this for a while I guess. Comments? 23:27, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you re-write these direct quotes because your supposed to avoid direct quotes: "brave Rosetail, and that their kits were safe thanks to Yellowfang." (In the Into The Wild section) and "Poppydawn! No! Don't leave me!" (In Cats of the Clan section) 23:34, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Expand BP please. 02:15, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Done, I also realised I forgot the main quote, so I added that in. 03:51, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, it looks great! :D 03:55, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks XD! 07:41, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Secrets of the Clans please. 18:16, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded Secrets of the Clans. 05:44, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Put what codes she was mentioned in, it doesn't say in the Code of the Clans section. 17:21, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the Code of the Clans section flow a bit more? Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:01, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Could Bluestar's Prophecy be elaborated a little bit? I see quite a few one sentence/two sentence paragraphs. If not, I understand - it's not possible. xD 17:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Done, and Cloudy, I understand where you're coming from. I tried to make sure every paragraph had at least three sentences in them, but if something doesn't make sence, just point it out. ;) 02:51, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful job, OwlXGlitter4EVER. The article looks wonderful. 05:06, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you find a better main quote? 23:57, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to use a quote from the quotes section? Or a new one? 05:06, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

A new one if you can find a new one. But if you can't, just pick one from the quote section. 23:56, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure what to use for the main quote. I found some new quotes, but put them in the quotes section. Like any of those? 04:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Use the one that says how brave she is. That's the only one that reflects upon her personality - the one that's up there now is just showing her grief for her mother. 15:37, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Greenflower ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded her history and added all of the quotes relevant to her. Comments? 10:04, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a few mistakes. Looks great though! 11:26, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I added a couple links. Other then that minor issue, this looks excellent for such a minor character. Job well done, Speckle. 15:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Should the "c" in "half-clan" be capitalized in the second paragraph? Otherwise, looks nice!

Done 16:08, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Deatil her appearance if you can't expand her appearance. 23:52, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think II can add anymore to her history without making it repetitive. 23:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more links without being redundent? 23:42 Sun Nov 20

Done. 22:46, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 00:06, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar - Silver Nomination
Only certain parts of the history needed to be expanded. Since it was the content drive, I fixed what was needed. DON'T tell me to expand Dawn, because I will hurt you. Comments? 23:39, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

His page is really good, expand Fire and Ice a bit. 15:42, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Outcast too please! 16:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

If possible could you expand Long Shadows and Sunset? 21:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I couldn't really expand POT, but I was able to expand Fire and Ice. 21:45, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a way you could expand Fading Echoes? Maybe he said something important when he was "unconvinced." But I'm not sure. 04:06, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the Cats of the Clans section? 17:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

The "c" in "a clan" in the second quote under the Quotes section should be capitalized, I think.

Clan isn't capitalized all of the time, believe it or not. Not sure why, but it happens quite a lot... 16:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's just a frequently-made typo. I know I forget to capitalize "Clan" a lot when I write fan fiction. Anyway, in the Firestar's Quest section, could you change the hyphen to a comma, and instead of saying "his territory" change it to "WindClan's territory"? 02:41, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Dawn. 04:19 Sun Nov 20 I forgot about being hurt. ^^ 04:24 Sun Nov 20

Are you still working on this, Icy? 00:06, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all of the history. Comments? 00:02, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I forgot the quotes. I'm adding them in now. 00:03, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the first paragraph of Dark River if possible? 05:15, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've changes a few typos in Dark River and Long Shadows if anyone hadn't noticed them. xxx --CloudtailxBrightheart 09:40, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :3 I can't break up Dark River because the first paragraph is all from the prologue. 01:11, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Expand/Detail ''Long Shadows. ''22:27 Thu Nov 17

Done. 23:49, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Capitalize "ancients" in the Dark River section. 20:24, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Snowtuft - Silver Nomination
First nomination here. I don't know if it's possible to add quotes, but if you want, I'll try. Comments? 01:55, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Suggestion: When someone edits an article, don't undo what they did. Usually, it makes the article better. Also, yes, there should be at least one quote. Find a narrator quote if he doesn't have any speaking parts. 01:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't know I undid the edit, I thought it was just some edit conflict by some random user. Sorry, i will look out for that in the future. Anyways, I'll try to find a quote. 02:23, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...the first section seems somewhat blunt. Fill that in and try to make it flow like the story. Otherwise, it looks great. 05:13, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I looked through the books to see when he was mentioned, and I added some quotes of the times he was mentioned. He isn't seen that often though, so it's kind of hard to add quotes on him. 06:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The quotes are fine, but the last quote needs a description. 01:24, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Added a description for the last quote. 23:44, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Expand ''Night Whispers. ''And if you can't, detail it :P 23:38 Sun Nov 20

I don't know if I can expand that much..., but I tried. 06:16, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 00:06, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart's Grandfather ~ Silver Nomination
He's a minor character, his history is about as detailed and expanded as possible, and there is a main quote. I'll continue to work on finding quotes, but otherwise... :3 05:13, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, this article is pretty good. I don't know if I can say anything, since you're looking for quotes. 06:15, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add in a few more details to the last part about what Mapleshade says about him, and add in the other quotes. Great work! 01:21, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Harrykit - Silver Nomination
Ok so this is my first nomanation so if this takes a long time..... well then i guess i fail XD anyways any comments? ♪ ★Hollycloud♪ ★ 17:18, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

His history could be a little more detailed. 20:37, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title. Expand The Rescue. 20:44, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well I couldnt find anything else unless I missed a few pages... I am known to do that well, appearntly to my english teacher... I a missed a few 5 pages on my book report XD ♪ ★Hollycloud♪ ★ 05:20, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add a quote. 00:49, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if you think this is necessary, but at the very beginning, where it says, "Harrykit was born to Leafstar and Billystorm", do you think, since he wasn't named at the time, you should just say, "He was born to Leafstar and Billystorm"? Optional, but I wanted to suggest that anyway. Oh, and there's a typo at the end, "Skyclan". It looks good so far. 20:22, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the typo, you guys do know you can fix the little typo's. 21:41 Sun Nov 20

Ok i fixed it sorry im not signed in right now but im really busy! HOLLYCLOUD

Stonepelt ~ Silver Nomination
Stonepelt has a good, large history for a minor character. Comments? 20:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Large history isn't everything ;) Expand SotC. 20:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't have SotC but I tried to expand as much as possible. 20:54, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I have the book, so I could if you wanted too. 21:00, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, sure. Thanks. 21:25, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome, I'll start now. 21:35, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 22:02, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think BP could use a little expanding. Also, try and make it flow better with sentences and paragraphs. Need help, just ask. =) 05:54, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Done that. 04:21, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work, but can you change the main quote to something that shows his personality more? The rest is great. 00:47, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

In Bluestar's Prophecy where it says: " and Bluekit runs into him on accident" shouldn't it be "by" accident? Correct me if I'm wrong. >.< M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:14, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Falcon Swoop - Silver Nomination
Comments? 15:31, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

See the part that's in parenthesis? Could you either remove those and make it flow with the article, or just get rid of the statement altogether? Also, could you extend Sign of the Moon at all? 15:34, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any quotes that could be used? 22:48, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 22:37 Thu Nov 24

Can you give her a main quote? 00:37, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find any quotes? Even if it's just the narrator quote. 23:32, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I will tomorrow, gotta read Dawn for some quotes x3 01:37 Mon Nov 28

Reedshine ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 22:40 Thu Nov 24

Does she have a better main quote? 00:35, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? Not her speaking, like the narrator talking. -- 15:56, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

There isn't really a better quote, but I did add to more to her quote section. 23:09 Fri Nov 25

Maggottail ~ Silver Nomination
Heh, you just have to love this character right down to his name. His history is expanded and detailed from the nearly three sentences he appears. He has two quotes and I can add a third upon request, though I don't feel it has any relevance to his personality. 00:06, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

What quote is it that you have in mind? Even if it's not a quote directed towards him, as long as it somewhat describes his personality. 04:58, Tue, Nov, 29, 2011