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Morningflower - Silver Nomination
Hi, I checked out everything, even fixed a few things. I'm pretty sure her page is ready. Feathe r  moon Of NightClan...  00:04, March 2, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I wonder, may there be a quote that can be found for her? Other than that, I see nothing wrong with Morningflower's page. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 19:38, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, she needs a main quote and a couple other quotes. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 21:13, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * River, there may only been a main quote. I mean, she's not really said anything quote worthy, with the exception of when she's with Ferncloud. Unless I missed something. Cloud  skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 00:50, March 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, as long as the quote shows her personality, its okay, right? 00:52, March 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * I would assume so. That would be a question for one of the higher-ups. Cloud  skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 19:47, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

In the case of a minor character like this, if something is said, it more than likely should be quoted. 21:17, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, unless somebody can find a quote, i cant. Its hard find one sentence in a whole book, and you have to look in a couple books to. User:Feathermoon/Sig' 01:05, March 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

It doesn't look like you've been working on this, so if you want, I can take over... 22:22, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wait! I'm going through every book she appears in and i'm teying to find a quote! I'm still on it! Feathermoon 23:08, March 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Okay, great! I just thought since there hadn't really been any comments for a long time...XD 23:09, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I really hate to say this because i usually do things on my own, but can someone help me just find a main quote? She barley says ANYTHING worth it. From what I can see, really all she does is give thankful looks, dirty looks, or doesn't even look at all. 04:58, March 19, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

It doesn't have to be dialouge. Just describe situation in which her action occurs. 21:20, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

The entire history could be skimmed and expanded, with more detail. Mkay?  Icy 123   ♥  20:59, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar ~ Gold Nomination
Third gold article up for nomination! I know I need to expand alot, so I want to know the exact books I need to expand. But I am working on some books currently. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 01:17, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really tell you which articles to expand, but, what about another quote or two? I know there may be a few more that could be used. If need be, River, I can find you one. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 01:27, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

No thanks Cloudskye, I added one more quote to her. I'll find another as soon as I can. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 01:59, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

The PO3 section needs the most expansion, followed by the NP series. 21:19, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Moonflight, I'll get right to it. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 21:24, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

PO3 is expanded, working on NP Series. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 00:03, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

NP Series Expanded! 21:19, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 20:15, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 14:39, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Screech of Angry Owl ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded his information and added a few quotes. Comments? River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 15:35, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with it, great job! Feathermoon 17:29, March 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The quotes you chose are good. I see nothing wrong with nominating Screech. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 20:01, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 14:05, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up. 03:04, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool ~ Silver nomination
Added quotes, expanded history. Comments? 22:14, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can Forest of Secrets be expanded anymore? If not, then supporting. Oh and I fixed the spacing on A Dangerous Path. 01:20, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

...I don't think so, she doesn't really appear that much in the series. And, thanks! 20:37, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay...Comments? 21:57, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing I think could be done is maybe see if a few more quotes are available. 21:23, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't actually appear all that much, so I think thats the best I can do; there are three quotes in all, and I think thats enough. 21:50, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflight: Thanks for adding the quote! I forgot to check the prologues XD 22:10, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry. The prolouges can have some pretty good quotes so never forget to check them.

CBV? 22:29, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur ~ Silver nomination
Added main quote and other quotes. Comments? 22:30, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can the Original Series be expanded any further? 01:23, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

No, not really. 20:42, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you haven't checked, than that's okay. But, please check if necessary. Here is a list of the browse insides you can use. 21:29, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

I looked; and I'm pretty sure thats all he appears. 21:52, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Night of No Stars ~ Silver nomination
Added main quote and other quote. Comments? 22:40, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can Outcast be expanded? And is it possible to get one more quote? 01:24, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try that. :) 20:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I added a quote, and expanded Outcast. I couldn't really do much, because I don't own the book... 21:15, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to help? 'Cause I have Outcast. 14:01, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you? that would be great! 21:56, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh...you left. My mistake. Could someone else help? 21:55, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Raindrop ~ Silver nomination
It looks good to me. Comments? 11:42, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a main quote and at least one more quote. If you need any help, I'll help you. 20:16, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I would appreciate the help. Could I put "Yeah-but we should do it better." for Raindrop's main quote? 10:22, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

If he's a minor character, you can use pretty much any quote as a main quote. Does he speak much? River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 14:30, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

She's a very minor character. She only speaks two senteces, and that's all. The one I asked if it could be a quote was the longest sentence she spoke in this book. So is that quote okay? 10:35, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Definitely, and then just put the other quote on her page as well. 14:00, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? I could use a bit of help. 13:54, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do. 21:27, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! :) 11:08, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Featherstar~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 05:25, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Her article looks very good, but is it possible to add one more quote? If not, supporting. 14:07, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Added another quote. 01:36, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before vote? 21:26, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smoketalon~ Silver Nomination
Looks good to me. 05:25, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks perfect, I see nothing wrong with him. Good job, Iceheart! =) 14:08, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before vote? 21:26, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Leaving for real
Hey everyone, it's me Riverpelt, I have decided I will be leaving this wiki. I feel I have done all I can do but I'll never ever forget any of you. It's been an honor serving as senior warrior, but it's time I must leave. I wish my name be removed from the members list, but I hope you all will never forget me as I won't forget you. Thank you. 16:52, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Riverpelt...you could have been a wonderful leader someday. In these dark times, you were one of the only leads who managed to hold the project together and prevented it from ripping apart at the seams. You will truly be missed and it will be very difficult to find another user like you, but I wish you well. 17:41, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Style of History sections
Many sections of cat's histories contain the following formulae, which in my opinion, should be eliminated:
 * In this book...
 * During this book...
 * Early in the book...
 * Later in the book...
 * At the beginning of the book...
 * At the end of the book...
 * (S)he is first seen when...
 * (S)he is last seen when...
 * (S)he is seen only when...
 * (S)he is seen only a couple of times
 * (S)he is not seen after this
 * ...and similar

These are not necessary. For instance, it is obvious that the first paragraph in a section describes when he/she is "first seen", or that the section about a book describes what happened "in this book" etc.

Kind regards, 19:17, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. It gives off a feeling of nonprofessionality. Removing them completely wouldn't really affect the article and the context so you have my support. 19:51, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. It is plain and used to much. The only one I vote we should keep would be, (S)he is not seen after this. Because that informs the reader on the paragraph that it is over. it is a clean way instead of saying 'Thats all they do in the book." Right? 02:16, March 21, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon


 * Well, if it is the last paragraph in the History, it clearly means that she's not seen again after this (else there would be another paragraph following it, right?) ;) 14:30, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Pack Leader - Silver Nomination
I have skimmed A Dangerous Path to update its cliffnotes for PB; and at the same time, I also rewrote the article on the Pack Leader, which I hereby propose for silver. I cited the description and listed all his appearances; there isn't much to him as he actually has only two brief appearances in the book. 21:36, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Rubblepaw - Silver Nomination
His paged looked pretty good to me, so comments? 01:08, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can the history be expanded a bit? Otherwise, supporting. 01:26, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I tried, but what his history says is the only things he's seen in. 22:57, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brook - Silver Nomination
Not much to say on this one :P 01:36, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can yiu try and expand Moonrise, Dawn, and Twilight? 01:47, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded; however I don't own those books, so I couldn't do it any further. Though tomorrow I'll have a look through the cliffnotes. 05:11, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I can help expand, if you'd like that. I also fixed a layout problem. :] 14:46, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Rushpaw~Silver nomination
Her page is ready. Indeed, she does apprear. It's ready. Comments? ❁  YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ❁  13:17, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Runningbrook - Silver Nomination
I expanded her history a bit, she has the citations she needs, a description and images. I think she is fit for silver grade.  Icy 123   ♥  00:10, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Egg - Silver Nomination
She looks good, comments? 14:53, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

firestar
firestar

yesterday i found out that firestar doesnt like waffles or cookies and he said that he is sourrounded by idots

Lukeiscute, that is uneeded on here. ♥Phoenixfeather: Spring is Almost Here!♥  17:53, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Join Request
Hello. I was wondering if I could join? I have almost all the books, and I really dislike it when there is false or inaccurate information in some of the articles. I'm still not entirely sure of how to reference, but I'll learn. I mostly put on the article talk page's that something is wrong, or needs to be changed. Thanks alot :) GMF160 LionxDove17:16, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know whether I can add you in, but welcome to the project! :) ❁   YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ❁ 19:19, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

No, sorry, but it has to be a project lead. 20:46, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

So does that mean I can't join? GMF160 LionxDove 21:06, March 23, 2011 (UTC)