Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 52

Larchkit ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote, but there wasn't any other quote. 21:44, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a quote by the narrator that describes her? 21:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try... I don't know if I can find one, though. 01:42, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

I added one about Dustpelt's reaction to her death. I guess it's ok since it shows how others liked the character. 01:51, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Moonrise, it seems a bit short. 08:21, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

She died in Moonrise, so there isn't anything to add. I added a few more sentences, though. 19:44, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I know she died quite early, but I think you could find some way to expand it, especially Twilight's section. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  19:55, June 12, 2011 (UTC)I

I only added one sentence. I did a search in the book for Larchkit and there was only one result where she was mentioned. The other books are quite similar, with only one or two references. 20:57, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! I think its ready. 19:59, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think it could use a different main quote. . . the current one is bothering me. It's just Ferncloud telling her kits to stop doing who-knows-what, it doesn't really say anything about the character or anything else, for that matter. 22:30, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I tried to find a better quote, but there isn't anything else with Larchkit in it. I think the quote is fine because it shows that Larchkit is adventurous and does things that gets her in trouble a lot. 23:28, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think its fine. :D 17:14, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Any other comments? 15:53, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job. I see nothing wrong with it. 18:39, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Will this be CBVed after some votes are over, too? 23:21, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, it looks great to me. 02:00, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Same here! 04:44, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 16:08, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 20:12, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Dustpelt ~ Silver Nomination
I think it's ready! Anything else needed? 21:34, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand Sign of the Moon? 22:06, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

expand twilight, long shadows, the fourth apprentice and night whispers 07:03, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can Code of the Clans be expanded? 17:07, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try. It's going to take a while, though. I'll say when it's done. 18:26, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded them all as well as I could. I can't expand Code of the Clans, though because I don't have the book and I can't get it off HarperCollins either. Can someone please help? 19:47, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded Code of the clans as much as I could. Hope I helped XD 21:37, June 15, 2011 (UTC)T

Thanks! It really helped! =) Anything else? 22:54, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the last paragraph of The darkest Hour. You could mention the parts he fights in the battle. Looks great! 17:08, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't mention him a lot in the battle, just that he fought alongside Sandstorm. I added it in. Anything else? 19:15, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

The last paragraph in The Fourth Apprentice could be expanded a little, but otherwise it looks good! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:22, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Any other comemnts? 02:05, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any places where he is mentioned in the fight in Fire and Ice? 01:01, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

There's a fight in Fire and Ice? And even if there is, he isn't mentioned so I can't do anything there. 16:28, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! CBV? 16:09, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 20:12, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanstar - Silver Nomination
He looks good to me. :3 21:54, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Was he seen in any other books? Other than that maybe expand it a bit more? It looks great! 22:12, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

add one more quote and expand code of the clans if possible 07:00, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

He wasn't in any other books, but I think Code of the Clans could be expanded a bit more; just add some more details. xD 17:12, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, expand it a bit more, but other than that I see nothing wrong! 22:57, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just to let you all know, I'm still working on this. I've just been kind of busy lately. :3 But I'll get to this tomorrow. The power is off at the moment, but somehow the internet still works. 01:25, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, that's weird! :P 04:12, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added a little more to his article, but that's all I could get. 14:26, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I think it looks great! 20:45,

une 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 05:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 18:45, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Songbird ~ Silver Nomination
I added all the quotes I could find, and expanded her history. Comments? 22:02, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change the main quote with one of the quotes below? The main quote right now doesn't seem to describe her, but if that's the only one that fits as her main quote, then never mind. Good job! =D

Can you get rid of the last quote or add a better background for it? It doesn't seem to say anything. 15:52, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...those were all the quotes I could find, including the narrator ones. Changed the main quote, deleted last quote. Anything else? 16:18, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add some more details to expand? It's ok if you can't, she's a very minor character. 19:06, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Added. Comments? 19:30, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Snowdazzle  ROAD TRIPPP!! 22:50, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think there's anything else to fix. Good job Mistystar! 02:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Great job. I see nothing wrong with this! 01:08, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Same. 04:31, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 05:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 18:48, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
There are quotes and I'm expanding it right now. Comments? ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 19:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any quotes that Blossomkit actually says? All the quotes currently are Rock's perspective on Blossomkit. The article had a few grammar things that I fixed, but other than that, it looks good! 21:25, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cats of the Clans is all from a narrative point of view which is Rock, plus there is absolutly no dialogue in the book at all. Thanks for the grammar check! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:30, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry about that! Silly me. :P Looks great! 23:07, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

xD No problem, thanks! Comments? 17:49, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add one more quote that shows her personality? Other than that, it looks great! 15:54, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, done! Any other comments? 18:42, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's ready! I see nothing wrong with it. :) 21:09, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

There was a typo at the bottom ;) Fixed. Well done angel. lol :P 08:24, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lol! Thanks! Comments? 19:00, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 05:01, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 19:06, June 27, 2011 (UTC)