Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 146

Dusk Nose (Kit) ~ Approved
My first kit and tortoiseshell! :D With the tortoiseshell and white debate going on, I gave her a creamy chest instead of white. I hope that's okay with the standards. I'm somewhat proud of this, but it definitely needs some sort of improvement. Anyways, enough with the talking and comment away! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:56, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Add some orange like her description says so. This is nice!--Dewsplash (talk) 02:02, November 6, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 02:02, Novembet, 6, 2015

She shouldn't have a creamy chest. She's only black and orange. 03:45, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the darker areas? It's kinda hard to decipher the black from the shading. 03:47 Fri Nov 6

Reuploaded Thanks Dew! I added orange, dulled down the pale chest and defined the shading. Hopefully this looks better. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 05:59, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the black and saturate the orange? Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:25, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened the base color and slightly saturated the orange. Does this look better? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:27, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Saturate the orange more? Since she's a specifically orange-and-black tortie, I feel like those colors should be pretty distinct. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:06, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

She shouldn't have any brown on her, if that's what I'm seeing. She's just specifically black and orange. 14:32, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the delay >< I made the pale chest gray and I saturated the orange some more. Is that ok? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 04:42, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, she shouldn't have gray at all. Please remove it. 13:22, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I replaced the gray chest with a pale orange. Is that ok? If not, I can remove it. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:38, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

i dont see why not, its still orange. define the shading a bit more. 13:44, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened it and sharpened it slightly. Does that look better? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:56, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

She still looks kinda gray. Can you try making her more brown? 23:27, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please clarify that? Why does she need to have any brown on her? She was specifically called orange and black. I was told to remove it a while ago. O.o ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:25, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

She didn't say add brown. She said make it more brown, as in a brown tint or shade on the color wheel, not full on brown.

Reuploaded I'm still not sure why I have to make her browner, but I shifted the base color towards the brown side a little more. I hope that looks ok. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:07, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

there's a weird braclet-like line above her paw --Belllastar (talk) 03:07, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on ==> that paw please. Looking good

Reuploaded Fox: I'd love to do that, but I lost the file because somehow GIMP didn't save itself, also, the paw is meant to be black. But thank you ^^, Belllastar: I assume this is what you meant? Anyway, finally reuploaded. How's this? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:10, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Well they technically doesn't mean you lost the file in general. you can still find it. Can you define the shading please? 17:18, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the lack of uploads >< I kinda forgot about this little guy lately. Anyway, I added a new layer of shading to define it. Also, I only have the very old version of this file, which was basically redone. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:36, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 19:25, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Approved

Nettle (ES) - Approved
I was so lazy on this haha... 01:22, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the legs? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:40, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

expand it more 00:07, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:15, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

add shading to the ears 05:01, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Yes, sorry! I'll be able to reupload it later today. 15:42, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:30, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading to the chest? :3

the pupluls are gray the need to be black (I did not read POS so if hes blind just ignore this comment) Belllastar (talk) 03:04, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:46, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

define the facial shading

Reuploaded 17:39, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Comments befoer approval? 19:26, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Approved

Fern Leaf (Alt ES) ~ Approved
*The wind is howling. (an imaginary point to who guesses which game character i modelled her pattern off) 21:00, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

No. Also, can you define the shading on the gray a tiny bit? I can see it on the white, but it almost vanishes when it reaches the gray.

Heh, nice Undertale reference. It could just be my screen, but maybe define the earpink in the ear closest to us a little more? I can't really see it. 21:27, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you possibly smudge all of the hearts just a tiny bit so they flow with the fur some more? 23:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded yes 05:51, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

No comments before approval? 23:54, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

approved