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Spiresight (Star) - CBA
black kitties.

I love this charact a lot. Good job! Define the ear pink a tad and smooth out the shading possibly? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:21, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not entirely sure if I'm able to smooth out the shading anymore than this.

Just smooth out hte bit of shading that runs along the upper back/shoulder, if that makes sense, to the right of his head. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:14, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

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Shellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
How do you charart. . . lol. I'm aware the shading needs smoothing out, but I'll fix it later.

re-up I tried.

Smooth out the head shading, define the tail shading, and add some lighting to --> front leg and paw. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:14, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I'll try to see what I can do for --> leg and paw shading. (yeah this is why kit shading sucks)

That looks better. :) Smooth out the shading on the forehead, and define the tail shading. Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 16:18, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Dovewing (Q) - For Approval
I'm proud with this! 00:47, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste outside of the <- side of the tail, and I believe the shading is leaking on the belly. Also, could you smooth out the shading? 00:57, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's also leaking on the tail, and can you define the shading on all legs?

Reuploaded The shading isn't leaking, it's just the pale parts. 01:29, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

the tint looks a bit too neon, and the shading is a bit flat. 01:30, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:00, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

still looks too neon, so maybe darken the tint 02:18, 9/05/2017

Looks nice! maybe define the shading depth and smooth it out a little? 03:39, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking on the belly. 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

This looks really pretty! Maybe define the eye depth?

Smooth out the shading on the front left (our left) leg, and define/darken the shading on the face? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:15, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Patch and Snek! :P 23:28, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the shading tint is too pink or something in my opinion. Maybe desaturate it a bit or make it more to the less neon side? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:07, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Mae (Ro) - CBA
Let me know if I left something out. Comments? 00:52, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

she looks ginger-tinted 00:53, 9/05/2017

Reuploaded. How's this? 00:57, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face and back legs. Also, add some light to the front legs and the ears. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:34, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:24, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe try to get the shading on the sides to follow the curve of the belly a bit more? It seems to just go up and down, there should be some shading on the underside of the belly, and the edge of the shading on the right should be more curved. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:16, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. 20:40, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

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Fog (L) - CBA
she's the leader of a rogue gang so it's enough. 00:56, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

this is cool, but wasnt she described as pale? also, prehaps define the shading a smidge 00:59, 9/05/2017

if you can come up with a cite, then add it. 01:02, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

I don't know if it's texture on there, but maybe smooth it out some and define the ear pink a tad? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded if you meant the pale parts, I only did it slightly because they're supposed to look like that. earpink also look visible enough to me. 18:58, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

This looks gorgeous. :D Define the shading on the tail more? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:18, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded thank u 23:56, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

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Rowanclaw (Star) - For Approval
Hopefully this new cord I'm getting for my tablet helps until my new one comes. This was fun to do. Although I know the smudging is weird. I'll fix that as soon as I have a functional tablet (RIP 6 year old one) 01:21 Tue Sep 5

Define the shading on the front legs? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 10:36, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

the stripes look too dark. they're just the same colour as the pely, set on mutiply. the paleparts on the tail should also take up much more. 18:51, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Recede/smooth out the shading a little bit on the right side of the belly? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:19, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">22:56 Thu Sep 7

Pinenose (star) - CBA
dont comment about the waste ill fix it soon <span style="">02:11, 9/05/2017

re-uploaded. <span style="">02:17, 9/05/2017

Maybe lighten the shading a tiny bit and smooth it out on the farthest front leg?

re-uploaded. <span style="">20:12, 9/05/2017

Define the tail shading more? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:19, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. <span style="">22:50, 9/05/2017

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Sunnykit (ki) - CBA
I didn't know what eye color to give her so now she has a blue eye and a yellow eye like her parents. i've spoiled some deaths for myself but it's fine, it's fine, i'll be okay.

Define head shading and smooth out tail shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 10:33, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

reups Best I can do for the tail shading, the doral stripe ends where the shading ends so it looks like it cuts off but I promise it doesn't

Omg I don't even see the dorsal stripe, lol! That's why it seemed hard edged. Define the shading on the face a tiny bit more or give some depth around the muzzle or something? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 11:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the facial shading more, and maybe have the shading connect from the right front leg to the neck? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:21, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

reups I think I got the facial shading, at least I can see it pretty well at this point. and @ Jayie I've had other images approved w this general source so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

It just seems to make the most sense anatomically, as the front leg is connected up to the shoulder. Unless I'm misunderstanding cat anatomy. :P I dunno. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:36, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

I completely understand that, but this blank in particular is like, the opposite of anatomically correct. I guess it's just more of a preference thing

reups changed the color to be more ginger because the last version looked kinda yellow imo. If you disagree, I'll change it back.

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Tigerstar (AVoS) (L) - CBA
hmm.. i'm aware of the weird pixel in the tail. i'll fill it next upload. 03:36, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

theres some waste where the torn ear is <span style="">05:21, 9/05/2017

There should be no stripes on the right side of the face, according to the kit image. :) 10:29, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some. This is terrific! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 10:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded there are stripes on both sides of the face. 12:44, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

I believe you forgot about that little weird pixel in the tail, lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 14:12, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:50, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little? Kinda starts to blend in with the brown. Or it could just be my laptop.

Re-uploaded. tried. look better? 19:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the facial shading and front leg shading a bit? On such a dark-furred cat, it's just harder to make out. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:24, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:39, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

That looks better. Define it more on the right side of the chest? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:45, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:01, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

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Crowfeather (De) ~ For Approval
Wow.. bad dad is deputy. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

define the texture <span style="">04:36, 9/05/2017

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:41, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe make the pale parts look more... idk,, they look as if they're made with chalk on the other images, i guess? Make them rougher maybe?? If anyone else could throw in their opinion or reword what I said, that'd be great.

It might just be my laptop but maybe blur the shading on the muzzle? And perhaps tone down the tint a bit?

The shading on the belly looks lighter than on other parts of the body, maybe darken/define it a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:24, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope I got everything you guys says. The shading on the belly was the same as the chest n other parts. Hope it's okay now. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:42, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Dovewing (Lo) - CBA
Eh 19:15, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

the shading seems kinda all over the place, so maybe smooth it out. if its the style, I apologize. and also, define the earpink <span style="">19:20, 9/05/2017

Updated 19:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:25, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Updated 21:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

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Dawnpelt (Star) - CBA
back at it again boys 21:13, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Rats, I was hoping to nab that after the one I'm on. It looks really good. Maybe define the shading a bit around the tail?

reup  21:25, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

reup a stripe was bothering the heck outta me and i might change it again.... 00:42, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

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Dash (Lo) - CBA
i got tired of smudging after doing the black parts so i just blurred the shading 21:40, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

blur the shading a little more on the most visible front leg. it seems a little hard egde to me... 21:45, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's the black parts that makes it look hard-edged to you, Bramble, but I did smooth it a little bit. 00:40, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

ge needs yellow eyes <span style="">02:25, 9/06/2017

Maybe make the neck look more white? Shading makes it look dark gray

Reuploaded There was originally supposed to be a little black on the neck, but I decided to get rid of it and lightened the shading a few ticks to make the neck more white. Is this better? 19:45, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? This is awesome. 8D

Shadowkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Back at it folks. ✌🏾

Smooth out the tail shading and define the shading depth there as well? 00:36, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the chest a lot more too nice work 00:37, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

uh pretty sure danny posted this, so uh...? <span style="">00:37, 9/06/2017

jay was having trouble uploading this from mobile so they sent it to me and i uploaded it for them.

I'll take care of the comments in a sec. but winter are you actually assuming that I posted Danny's art? Thanks for assuming good faith.

Reuploaded thanks for the help with that Danny. And sorry I snapped earlier, I was just tired.

Hm, the only thing I can see here is maaaaybe define the facial shading just a tad? But even then, it's more the shading on the top of the head.... these blanks are so tiny.

So I tried as you suggested, Jayce, but it didn't make much of a difference on these StarClan cursed blanks. I'll end up reuploading later, after work.

Reups

Ant (Lo) ~ For Approval
17:28, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

This is really, really great Sziri! Define the light on the head and define ear pink? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:08, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Aww,thanks 16:32, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Fuzzball (KP) ~ For Approval
FUZZBALL

smooth out the shading on the head 20:41, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dunno if that made a difference - there's ginger on the top of the head that makes it look a lot sharper than it is.

does he have a special collar that isn't listed on his page? because I don't think we can just alter lineart like that. 08:48, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

agreeing with skt. unless theyre cited with a special collar, lineart editing is not allowed. <span style="">22:03, 9/07/2017

Reuploaded Sorry about that; I suppose I envisioned him with a bowtie. I was going to upload after just skt had commented, but schoolwork got me busy

Floyd (Ro) - For Approval
I forgot to add the mange to his pelt, and I'm probably gonna tweak the shading a fair bit on the next upload, but oh well. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:40, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

does he have eyelashes? <span style="">01:45, 9/07/2017

Define all leg shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:14, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be a patch of brown that is darker than the rest by the shoulder. 21:53, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

p sure thats shading <span style="">22:02, 9/07/2017

Lightkit (Kt) ~ For Approval
I made Tigerstar's (her grandrandfather) color and Tigerclaw's (her father) stripes (+ eyes).

This looks great! Define ear pink a bit?

Reuploaded

Reuploaded

Tuna (Ro) - For Approval
Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading <span style="">21:36, 9/07/2017

Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading