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Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120923200241!Shellyheart.png 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me.

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinx the power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.  Charlie  Let's   go to   Candy Mountain  02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

I couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows  call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/5/56/Giratina_orig.gif Crystals   over   Sparks  http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/2/27/Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. -- Đark ɦallows  06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? 20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
Looks like Firestar! :o He was described as ginger as a kit. Comments? 04:32, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cutee <3 >3< Blur the earpink on our left a tad. 19:02, October 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine.

Define the shading on the side and legs a tad? 22:59, October 4, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 17:28, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh's in the process of moving and won't be back for a few more days, I believe.

Ashheart (A) ~ For Approval
Ifail...anyways, comments? 00:18, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Ashheart.apprentice.png 00:30, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.

I changed the heading so it's proper and goes with her name. She's Ashheart, not Ashpaw.

I'll rename it next reupload but, Reuploaded-- 10:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 12:41, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink appears to have leaked into the back of the ears. 23:53, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried...I know about the waste, so can you guys not comment on that? And I tried to rename the file, but it's not letting me....so if I could have some help? 19:32, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

We have to comment on the waste until you get rid of it. To rename the file, just click on this: and upload it. 19:40, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Toadskip (W) - For Approval
It sucks badly I know ;W; Comments for improvement? 00:34, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot his white splashes xD 00:37, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded:  I tried. 00:42, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

The splashes are too blurry, make them a tad bit sharper and blend them in the direction of the fur lie. The earpink also seems a little bright, could you tone it down? Very nice! 01:39, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 01:44, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

The splashes look kinda flat, mayber smudge them? 03:13, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe have the splashes radiate from the belly and legs, since he's confirmed to specifically have white legs, for a more natural look? And have some of the splashed in the middle of the charart and not just along the outline? 03:25, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fu I wanted this so bad. ;-; -school- Anyways, maybe smudge the stripes a tad :3 <3 12:32 Tue Oct 9

Re-Uploaded: x.x 19:37, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. And could you blur the highlight/shading on his shoulder just a bit? 22:36, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 23:14, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

He looks a little green. 23:50, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: gah. 23:56, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Marmalade (K) - For Approval
I fail at stripes if they aren't thin ;w; I decided to be a rebel and try out a new style. Sorry if he looks a bit cross-eyed ouo Commentos? 02:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fix dem eyes gurl, and define ze highlights. Sexiness <3 02:27, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Splook this is freaking amazing. -steals- You gotta add the shredded ears~ 02:29, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful. <3 Define the earpink please. 02:43, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes some. And what are you talking about, this is amazing. Looks darn near realistic to me :) 03:32, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define teh shading a bit. Lurvely. 14:48, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Asdfg, I honestly didn't think this was that good ;w; Thanks you guys <3 If the shredded ears aren't showing, nor are the changes. 20:07, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

It. Is. This is amazing. Comments before approval? 20:09, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

I realize I'm nitpicking, but could you make the cuts on his right ear less deep? The way they are, the tip of his ear would be literally rotting off. 04:58, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Speaking of shredded ears, I couldn't find the cite anywhere. I Ctrl+F'd the whole book and the only mentions of shredded have to do with fur or expressions of speech. Unless a cite can be found, I suggest you leave the ears the way they are. 18:53, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Torn ears are no more. 19:42, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Marigoldkit (ki) ~ CBA
-despises- ugliness x.x comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:48, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define/add the ear-pink, define the shading/highlights, and the depth in the eyes 03:12, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add some white, and blur the darker ginger parts. 03:14, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -hates- I don't think changes show. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste around the charart, I have a nifty trick to get rid of it if I haven't already told you. The markings on the legs and tail looks a little pixil-y, blur it a msidge please? 03:25, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah.... I'm sorry, I can't do this. x.x I really, really hate this and honestly have no desire to work on it anymore. Anyone can take over. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:26, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

I know I'm no longer in the project, but I wouldn't mind taking a stab. 03:28, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Any questions? Or can I just sit and bask in my awesome for a bit? 04:07, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems a tad dark, lighten it a smidge? Very nice Shelly <3 04:11, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, too. Awesome? Yeah, suuuuuure.

Re-uploaded. Oh, you wish you had an iota of my awesome. Anyway, I lightened the shading and defined it as much as I care to. Shading is soft around the edges more often than not, especially in natural lighting. 01:24, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, no. I'm already awesome enough. Anyways, comments before approval?

Nettlespot (W) - For Approval
Yay for ginger/white kitties! I so call her queen Just kidding xP Comments? 02:50, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! The color chosen for the earpink looks odd against the ginger and white. I think that the flecks are not necessary on the ears, but if you keep it, the color should be changed (darker, I think) 03:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:39, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a little fluorescent pink. Tone it down a tad?

Re-uploaded 04:01, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, lighten it, and enlarge the chest "highlight". 19:02, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:02, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

I can't find anything to improve upon, I'm going to go ahead and CBA this :) 01:55, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm very sorry, but the overall shading seems flat. Could you add more depth to it?

Re-uploaded 22:05, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Finchflight (W) ~ For Approval
Wow I haven't made an actual charart in forever. Anyways, his eye color is gray for now until we find out his eye color. Same goes for his pelt length. Changes aren't showing, because I just removed a tiny bit of waste. *breathes* Comments? 11:28, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white areas out a bit more, especially around the whiskers/muzzle area.  Millie  It's   all   black magic!  11:33, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:44, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

He's black and /white/ correct? Lighten the white up a lot. Also, eye color doesn't matter, nor does pelt length if it's not specified within the book. You can make him however you please.

Reuploaded Since the shading is what's making it dark, I lightened the shading and the white two shades. 22:32, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Frogtail (A) ~ For Approval
Here's Frogpaw. I kinda messed this one up x.x Comments?

♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  12:17, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Frogtail.apprentice.png 12:36, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

-derp- It won't let me x.x Could someone help? Sorry... ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  16:17, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink  18:32, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Renamed. 21:57, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on the shoulder. 01:59, 10, 10, 2012

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:19, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks kinda purple, and maybe you could define it?Pikachushinx the power of the past 12:29, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:49, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Pixie (KP) ~ For Approval
Dude, her name is sexy<33 Comments? 12:29 Tue Oct 9

She doesn't look white, could you either lighten the texture or the shading a little? 17:45, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe define the earpink a leetle bit more? 02:12, 10, 10, 2012

It looks like she has mottles around her neck - could you fix that?

She's a little cock-eyed, too. Maybe move her left pupil one pixel towards the middle of her face. 05:29, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't have access to the .xcf damned usb so I started over owo 05:51 Wed Oct 10

Add a bit more gleam to the eye, I can hardly see it :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    16:27, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

You put earpink in both ears on this black ^.^''Pikachushinx the power of the past 21:12, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchwind (W) ~ For Approval
-Finally, I get to do one! =D Except, it's terrible quality. BTW, please do mind if my grammar is terrible often. My keyboard is broken, so I need to use copy-paste to type, unless I (rarley) get access to my bro's laptop(Like now!)Pikachushinx the power of the past 19:22, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the flank/haunch shading, thin out the arm shading, and lighten the shading. 19:25, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

If he's ginger, please cite it on his article. Also, he needs stripes.

Redden the earpink. 19:38, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Also enlarge the earpink a bit and define that tail shading. 23:49, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Woo, keyboard fixed! Anyhow, redid the shading(Did the tail in seperate layers because that's harder to do), added stripes, redid earpink. And he is ginger, it already says so on the article. And it did when I reserved it.Pikachushinx the power of the past 11:38, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him less golden and more gingery? 12:28, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

And maybe add a few more stripes. c: 13:24, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make/extend the bottom edge of this ---> side of the earpink so it completes the triangular shape. It's shaping up nicely Pika! 16:02, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivy! I'll work on it tonight, I got schoolwork to do >.><span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:14, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Got spare time, so I did it now. Re-uploaded!<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:43, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Mallowfur (W) ~ For Approval
Siberian breed kolkolkolkol  Aspentail has a charart, so yeah. Comments? <span style="">02:36, 10, 10, 2012

The stripes on the tail kind of get lost, can you define them or make the base pelt on the tail lighter so they can be seen? 02:43, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">02:48, 10, 10, 2012

Amazing. Maybe blur the earpink a tiiiiny bit more?<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:19, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D <span style="">22:50, 10, 10, 2012

Hawkheart (Alt. Medicine Cat 2) ~ Under Evaluation
The title remains as Under Evaluation because I'm not sure if I'm an apprentice in PCA or not. But anyway, here is Hawkheart's 2nd alt. -- 02:46, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the brown flow with the fur, and if that's texture on the grey, make that also flow with the fur. <span style="">08:37 Wed Oct 10

The earpink seems a bit bright  16:04, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading from the pelt. 19:45, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the shading too. 20:17, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lizardstripe (W) ~ For approval
Lolfail. Comments? 04:49, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just lightened the stripes to match the queen. 11:37, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

The edges of the stripes seem a bit hard-edged, could they be blurred a little? If it's that way on the queen, they should be blurred a little more too (I don't think I was available to leave a comment then, if it's more blurred then ignore the second half of this comment :P )  16:07, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) ~ For Approval
*pokes* I killed it. o.e

Can you blur the tip of the ear pink on --> just a leeeeettle more? You didn't kill this, Stoner. It's amazing~

Since it says she has wide-set eyes, can you make the right eye (her left) go over > that way by about one or two pixils? Also, define the arm, belly, and hind foot's shading. 23:06, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hal (KP) ~ For Approval
Hi! I'm Millie... most of you know me, but it's my first time putting something up. The shading and earpink aren't the best, but hopefully you can give me some pointers on what to fix and how to fix it.

Also, his eyes and pelt length will stay like this until he is mentioned as having otherwise. Comments? <span style="font-family:Segoe Script; text-shadow:#000000 0.2em 0.2em 0.20em; color:#571B7E; background:#348781; border:1px dotted #000000; -moz-border-radius: 2em; -webkit-border-radius: 2em; color:#000000;"> Millie  It's   all   black magic!  09:02, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

This... is really pretty. Can you lighten the farthest back shading just a bit? It's too close to looking black. 11:03, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes... They're a little neon, and I can't see any depth in them.<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 11:40, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Hal.kittypet.png. Daaaamn, Mil. Nicely done.

Is there any possibility of you adding a greater distinction between the background fur and the stripes? They're kind of difficult to tell apart from, especially since they're so close. 23:04, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ashheart (W) ~ for approval
Ashheart as a warrior. I don't think she looks too bad, especially since it was done on pixlr (stupid school computers won't let me download gimp). Comments? 14:20, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blend out the shoulder shading more, define the earpink, and make it a tad less blurry 16:08, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing. 16:51, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Earpink looks purple. Is earpink supposed to look purple? If it is, tell me, but as far as I know, needs fixing.<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:52, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if canges are showing. 17:01, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  20:16, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shading's fine, Feather. Earpink still looks purpley, but the changes do show.<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 21:10, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

No. The shading needs to be blurred.

Crowtail (E) ~ For Approval
The only canon black tabby in the series. <333 I adore Crowtail. Comments? Colors are from the warrior.

Are the ears supposed to be lighter than the surrounding fur? 21:37, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Deerleap (W) ~ For Approval
I know there's an extra dot in the name ;-; Comments? 21:33, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more stripes and brighten the ear-pink 22:06, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste and also define the shading. 22:07, October 10, 2012 (UTC)