Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 207

Badgerfang (Alt A) - Approved
Honestly this is absolutely horrible just like... don't even comment on it yet. I'm gonna basically redo it but I won't have any free time till Tuesday so I'm just gonna post this now. However I plan to pretty much keep the placement of the markings, so if there's any suggestions for making the placement closer to the cotc image, I'm all ears on that.

It's not bad at all! I know you said not to comment, but since it's actually up for approval, it technically should be able to receive comments. Brighten the white on the entirety of the image, since it all looks light gray right now. 14:37, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

I don't mean to be rude but yes I'm well aware that it's gray and that's exactly why I said not bother commenting on that stuff since I'm redoing it all... I mean you're free to leave whatever comments you want but chances are unless it's about the placement of the markings, I'm most likely already planning on fixing it in the next upload. Shading's gonna be redone, markings will be tidied up, earpink will be redone, and all the colors will probably be tweaked to have a better contrast and look more like the source image.

Well, to avoid confusion and frustration like this in the future, please finish your charart before uploading and posting it on the approval page. There's really no rush. 14:54, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

The rush was the fact that I was gonna lose my reservation. I did bring the image to a completed stage, I just decided I wasn't happy with how it turned out and didn't have the extra time to redo before my reservation would expire. And anyways I still do need feedback on the placement of the markings since it's very hard to interpret where the markings are on the cotc image due to the glow, and I clearly stated I was redoing everything except that so I'm not quite sure why there would be confusion there.

Hm, I think it's no different than when people notice things about their image and then ask others not to comment on them. What Paleh did was perfectly acceptable and has been allowed within the project for many years now. Many leads, as well as regular members, have done it, due to noticing something different about the image themselves that they already know they need to fix. Regardless, are you going to be changing the base as well? Because that's definitely really hard to tell where that ends and your gray (is it gray??) patches begin. Are they also stripes on the gray or is this texture? I'm finding it extremely hard, and I can't really tell what you're going for here.

You’re allowed to post an image 80% done on the Approval page, it doesn’t have to be 100% done. Although I’m not sure how I feel about asking people not to comment at all... 23:38, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

When you re-up it you might use a different color for the lighting because it makes the gray look green-brown. Also, I think the shoulders are totally white in the COTC image, while the rest of his body is tabby. 0:08 Tue Feb 12 2019

I am not quite sure it is fair to put an image on the approval page, the place meant for commenting on images, and telling people not to comment yet. 03:12, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Unless I broke any rules, please take any further discussion on the matter to the talk page. Unrelated, it's now taken me doing around 20 versions of this image (I wish I was exaggerating) before I was finally somewhat happy with it. I'm convinced it's cursed. I'm still not even sure I'm happy with the patterning on it... any thoughts?

No comments, really. And tbh I think it looks pretty good. CBA?

Approved

Skystar (Le) ~ Approved
i colorpicked from his star since that one didn't have much shading covering the main body. It's the same color as them just appears darker because of the texture and shading tone, pretty sure the shading is a dark blue but I forgot lmao. Comments? 19:14, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the face, tail, and <- paw. :) 22:42, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the fur tufts of the > elbow

The eyes look like they are strabismus. The pupils should be fairly consistently vertical and should not be mirrored in each eye as the cats head is slightly to the side. Usually you want something like (| ) (| ) or ( |) ( |) or bring the pupils closer together. 23:33 Mon Feb 11 2019

Re-Ups, I moved the --> eyeshine over so maybe it looks better now. 03:36, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

It still looks like strabismus. — ♡ you're such  ' re such a dream to me." data-rte-attribs=" style title=you're such a dream to me."&gt;a dream to me. (04:20, 2/12/2019) ​

I think it’s the two black pixels lower than the rest of the pupil block. Maybe removing those would work? :) 04:25, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups 07:32, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. Lighten the base a small touch? It needs to be matching the rogue as the first in the set, which is slightly lighter than the star.

try #c8c8ca as the base (its slightly lighter than you have I think) 04:15 Thu Feb 14 2019

Re-Ups 04:41, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved