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Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120923200241!Shellyheart.png 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me.

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinx the power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.  Charlie  Let's   go to   Candy Mountain  02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

I couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows  call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/5/56/Giratina_orig.gif Crystals   over   Sparks  http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/2/27/Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. -- Đark ɦallows  06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? 20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on these? 00:44, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I am, I've just been having complications with it. My sincerest apologies :(  01:04, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front paws are still a bit too big, can you shrink them a bit? 19:37, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bump the closest eye up higher and smooth out the back. 20:32, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front left (my left) paw should be facing the front a bit more. It's on quite an awkward angle.  Millie  It's   all   black magic!  02:07, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The face looks...How do I put this? Flat-ishPikachushinx the power of the past 14:58, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, the face is fine. With the pose that it is in, the head would be angled that way, making the face appear that it looks kind of 'flattish'. 01:20, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 17:56, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ashheart (W) ~ For Approval
Ashheart as a warrior. I don't think she looks too bad, especially since it was done on pixlr (stupid school computers won't let me download gimp). Comments? 14:20, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blend out the shoulder shading more, define the earpink, and make it a tad less blurry 16:08, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing. 16:51, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Earpink looks purple. Is earpink supposed to look purple? If it is, tell me, but as far as I know, needs fixing.Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:52, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if canges are showing. 17:01, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  20:16, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shading's fine, Feather. Earpink still looks purpley, but the changes do show.Pikachushinx the power of the past 21:10, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

No. The shading needs to be blurred.

Reuploaded 18:06, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading and darken the earpink. 18:55, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more depth to the shading? It looks flat right now. 19:35, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink so that it's more in the ear? 22:11, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:16, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, and more in the ear. Also, define and blur the shading. =3 12:39, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, and define the haunch shading too. Looking good. 08:34, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:41, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch highlight, if there is one.

Reuploaded 17:10, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 18:18, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, but can you define the shading and dull the chest highlight a tiny bit? 19:11, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The highlights were bothering me, so I got rid of them all together. 13:54, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Shading still looks flat. 18:36, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Double re-ups 17:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (Q) ~ For Approval
Her name, her description, mary-sue, in a good way <3 Comments? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:29, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller, and blur it 19:43, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

e.e I tried, stupid pixlr makes every bit of shading a hard time. When I blur it, it squares, when I change the size, it overlaps the sides. Ah, well, re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:51, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her face, please. =3 01:54, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I love the pattern, but it's unrealistic in the means that the design isn't formatted to the actual pelt of a cat. The pelt doesn't match up by bit and piece when the cat strikes a certain pose. All you need to do is shift a few pieces of the design like the legs, tail, and a tiny bit on the chest. Feel free to disagree though. 04:32, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, Teldy, but I'm inclined to disagree with this. I know a friend who had a cat with a similar pelt to this, and I think it is a possible pelt pattern, even though maybe slightly abnormal. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  10:14, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

What Teldy is talking about is that the pelt moves too perfectly. On the back legs, the pattern needs to be raised up. On the front legs, it need to be brought down, so that it looks more natural. Now the pattern looks like it just goes straight across; which is unnatural. 10:19 Fri Oct 12

Re-uploaded I changed the pelt style to make it more realistic :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:52, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The cream seems kinda pinkish. Was that intentional?

Yeah, the other cream colour I used didn't blend well, so I tried this one, and it looked slightly better. Also, I think if light catches it, it will reveal more creamy :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    16:17, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I think you'll need to change it. It looks skin-colored, and makes it seem like Rowanberry doesn't have cream and brown, but brown streaks of fur.

For a brown and cream cat, I was thinking something like either Molepaw or Ivystripe without the stripes (the forelegs and underbelly) or like a tortoiseshell. 16:33, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    17:30, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

She looks mottled, if you use pixlr, it's probably because of the blur tool, instead of using the blur tool, I'd suggest using the Gaussian Blur tool at a rate of ten. Also, the shading looks a bit hard-edged on her tail. By the way, this is beautiful. =D =3  22:02, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink 01:11, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the brown slightly darker because it looked a bit golden. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:08, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and fix the eyes and the earpink. 08:12 Sat Oct 13

The front leg closest to us, still looks mottled. 23:46, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can't see it mottled :s ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:11, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it. It's near the elbow. 21:17, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern still looks like it's been pasted on. It should curve and go with the body. o3o 00:11, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda gray on the cream. Maybe try and shade with dark brown instead of black 03:19, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shadig still looks hard-edged on her tail, can you blur it? x3 12:15, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:17, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, it looks a little bit paint-brushed on, still. 10:18 Thu Oct 18

Re-uploaded I've made it look more like the apprentice and I've darkened the brown. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    15:23, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes on the haunch connected. ^^  19:31, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    19:47, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it up a bit. 20:19, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten what up? o3o ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    11:57, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The entire image. It's a little too dark. .-.

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    15:09, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a bit gray right now... When Rowan said to lighten up the image, I believe she meant the colors(if I'm right), not really the image itself... (Hopefully you get what I'm saying, since I think I know what you did xD)  02:11, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is...lighter than it should be? o.O

Umm.. it looks black to me...? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:00, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's not black, it's an extremely dark grey. Please fix it. 08:15 Wed Oct 24

Barkface (MCA) -for approval
lineart tweaks ftw <3333 comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:23, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

There is some waste around him ,16:21,October 13,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 16:46, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Is there shading on the far legs? It just looks lighter to me. 18:30, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Try and curve the tail more naturally so he doesn't look like he has a broken tail. 00:45, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the pixels on the top that are solid black. 17:00, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add depth to the herbs? 18:08, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lessen the red tint in the shading a bit. =3 12:43, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Choo still working? 00:38, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Cleared waste, fixed tail, desaturated shading, shaded far legs, added depth to herbs, and fixed black pixels. Sorry for being so late to upload. I've been really....... busy this week. Thanks for understanding =) Hopefully I'll be able to work on it more this weekend. Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 19:34, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define the earpink to our left. x3 20:28, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

The colour doesn't really match the mc. 07:47 Sun Oct 21

Why do the paws look like they're a different shade compared to the rest of the pelt? o.O

Curve the tail more naturally. 20:30, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Give some more variation in the herb colors and add shading 00:17, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (W) ~ For Approval
I know this needs work, but I'm proud of her. :D Comments? 20:41, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:42, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the earpink. It looks like the tan bit on her ear. 22:38, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I'd rather not change the earpink because I got it from an .xcf, but if anyone else agrees I'll change it. 20:31, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be more visible. 00:24, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want me to define it some more? 20:07, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be lighter to match. 18:22, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ 20:30, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern on the haunch doesn't really match the apprentice. Could you shift the brown down the leg a few pixels?

Re-Ups^ 20:31, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Pattern still needs to be shifted, this time on the opposite side of what you did on the last upload. It looks too neat, and matches with the rest of the pattern way too much to be considered natural.

Nutwhisker (W) - For Evaluation
My first PCA work. I tried to match the kit art... Comments? 17:52, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Dawn, this is /wonderful/ for your first PCA image. I'm very impressed.

Holy... O.O this is excellent. Define the earpink more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:26, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the texture a little and define the haunch shading. ^^ If you use GIMP, I can give you the xcf or if not, I can give you the exact colours I used. 22:39, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Improved?''' Thanks for the compliments. ^^ I do use GIMP, so that would be great help. (Although I probably should have asked from the beginning, heh...) 17:10, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the entire image and in between the legs. 22:17, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. I can hardly see the depth. 14:37, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Improved? 18:29, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but the paw shading needs to be thinner and you need to lighten the belly/chest shading and the midriff shading. 19:13, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Featherstorm (W) - For Approval
Featherstorm, aka the cat that looked like Hickory until her queen image was redone! I quite like how this came out =) So...whatcha want me to change? 05:42, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hiiiiickory <33333 Hmm....can you possibly define /where/ the ear pink is in the ear? It blends in with the pelt and I can't really tell exactly where it stops and the rest of the pelt begins.

Also, could you make the ear pink smaller? 19:14, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I kinda derped out and didn't update this x.x  04:31, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Archeye (E) - For Approval
Okay so this is the first image I've created on my Mac, so don't be shocked at the failness of it.... x.x 04:03, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

He needs patchy fur. 08:24, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes only just a tad 15:21, October 22,2012 (UTC)

Scorchwind (K) ~ For Approval
Well...I tried. x.x -- 18:00, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 18:01, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 18:09, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 07:35, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might now be showing -- 14:57, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten him up a bit to match the warrior? 20:38, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyflower (E) ~ CBA
Well......uh....I tried. Trolly and Icey stalked me while making this, so I'm sure it matches pretty okay... Comments? 23:23, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back just a smidge. This I like. <3

There's a bit of waste outside of the chest. Prettaay~ c: 22:42, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reurploaded~ x3 02:18, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

And we're going to do this because it's beautiful and I adore it. CBA?

Cinderfur (W) ~ CBA
lol, another Cinderfur charart. That makes three of his images that I've worked on xD Comments? 05:16 Sun Oct 21

Can you define the light source a bit better? I'm kinda confused as to where it is coming from. From his eyes it looks like from behind, but the back is shaded darkly, and so is the front, if that makes sense. 22:31, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o3o <span style="">05:53 Tue Oct 23

CBA?

Poolcloud (W) - For Approval
Took this over. Tried to match the smudges as best as I could xD Comments and concerns? 17:29, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty~ Could you darken the shading on the haunch? 19:16, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a tiny bit? 21:33, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

The grey shouldn't go right down the leg, and the other front paw should be grey. Purdy. 23:17, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 22:23, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Could you brighten the "highlights" on the shoulder and haunch and expand the one on the should up a little? 22:25, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the gray on her forehead darker so that it matches her other image? 23:07, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

She should be a bit whiter; her other images look almost pure white. This looks pale grey. 02:30, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (A) - For Approval
Ew. I tried, though. Comments for improvement? 17:31, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

I really don't know how to put this, but can you make the tail a bit smooter? 22:02, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (Alt Ki) - For Approval
Comments? x3 03:03, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^^ 10:55, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

And blur it too 15:20, October 22,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just re-did the shading. I don't think changes are showing. =) 22:07, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define it a little more? 04:10, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:08, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Newtspeck (Q) ~ CBA
Comments? <span style="">00:04, 23, 10, 2012

Oh wow Mounty, how do you make suh awesome chararts? Anyways define the shading a tad. x3 02:36, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Duck 8DDD <span style="">03:55, 24, 10, 2012

CBA? Sexy image~

Sorry but make the markings lighter (mostly past her arms, the markings on her belly and back leg is too dark)  04:34, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">04:48, 24, 10, 2012

CBA? 04:51, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Russetfur (KP) - CBA
Millie's reservation ran out so this is mine now. Yay for rainbow collars! Comments? 12:05, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make her neon Lighten the shading a little.<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 12:24, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:34, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?

Boulder (A) - For Approval
Before you ask me to, no, I cannot make it look more like the warrior/rogue/whatever. Too many stripes for me to handle making it exactly the same, sorry. Second, I can't add anymore stripes. Where would I be able to put them? Other then that, comments?<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 12:22, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Well, you're going to need to make the stripes match a little better. They don't match as they are now. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice style, and if it were an individual style it would be good, but there's a specific pattern you have to match.

Rowanberry (Ki) - For Approval
She wasnt easy at all, so ..ehm, yeah there she it, 14:08, October 23,2012 (UTC)

She needs a pink nose to match the apprentice. Wonderful job! 21:52, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Can you blur her (our) right paw along with her chest shading? 02:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, 12:17, October 24,2012 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
First charat as a warrior~ Anyways, Skt helped me with this a lot last night, comments? 21:40, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the kit a bit more with the texture. Other tan that, great job! =D 21:48, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

You can just move one of the texture layers around a bit more and maybe mess around with the opacity. ^^ 23:06, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Raggedstar (A) ~ For Approval
Ohlook. Raggedpaw. <3 Comments? All colors are from his other images, so please don't ask me to change them.

So fuzzy!! Give him a bit of light on his sexy tabby face and shoulder, dear Cloudy 23:45, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

You don't have to, but do you think you can make the tip of his tail a bit more pointed to match his other images? 22:57, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I'd think that the raggedness wouldn't stay the same throughout his entire life, so I think it's fine. However, if others think it should be changed, all they need to do is speak up.

Eh, a little difference in raggedness ain't gonna kill anyone. I think it's fine. 23:14, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments plz 10:35, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the body shading a bit? The face and tail is fine imo, but the body could use some blurring. :3 So cuteee<3333 <span style="">10:43 Wed Oct 24

Re-uploaded. ffffff  23:18, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Can you just blur the shading a little moar? All hail Cloudkit/pelt, the sexy god.

Re-uplaoded 01:12, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface(Alt W)- Under Evaluation
== Clawface (Alt W)- Under Evaluation == Tried my best with that shading :P. Comments? Bbun (talk) 01:21, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading. 01:22, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bbun (talk) 01:31, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur it some more and lighten the legs a little. 02:14, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong; but doesn't this need scars? <span style="">12:08 Tue Oct 23

Nope it doesn't, as he was mentioned as scarred in Into the Wild and this alt is from Yellowfang's Secret. 12:17, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ignore the waste in the backround, I'll remove them if that's the only thing I need to fix left Bbun (talk) 18:52, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading on the tip of the tail and lighten the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  вαʐïṉģα   19:01, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope the changes are showing :P Bbun (talk) 19:27, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The file needs to be File:Clawface.warrior.alt.png.

You mean to be renamed or to be changed? Also I don't know how to "define" the tail tip so I'll leave it at that until more people complain. I'm focusing mainly on the waste now. Bbun (talk) 19:34, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There's some waste by his closest ear, his tail, and his paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Halloween!  20:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

When you define the tail tip's shading, you make it more visible. But I agree with Feather, it needs to be defined. 21:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

So where do I put the tail tip shading? And I already know about the waste. So that means I blur the tail tip shading along with the rest of the body? Bbun (talk) 21:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Do you have shading on the tail tip? Looking at it looks like there isn't any, so you could add it, Just make sure they are moth blurred equally. /hope this makes sense /horrible at explaining things. 23:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried at doing the tail shading. Ignore the waste- I'll clean it up later. Bbun (talk) 23:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Please change the file name to what I asked you earlier. You can ask 'Teldy to change it for you if need be.

Re-uploaded Teldy already fixed it, and tell me if the wasteless pic is showing. Bbun (talk) 23:46, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Can you connect the tail tip shading with the rest of the tail shading? It looks out of place with a blotch of unshaded fur. Oh, and I believe I see just a bit of waste near his tail tip. 01:17, October 25, 2012 (UTC)