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Snaketail (FQ) (D) ~ For Approval
Ye ever wanty just wrap yersel up in tin foil nice and crozy and then jus get right inty the microwave and blow yersel up tae heck up 13:16 Sat Jun 25

Wow, this looks amazing! :D I feel like the shading needs to be a little darker/just shade a little more on the bottom of the belly and the edge of the tail? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:43, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you so much!! I feel like...it looked a bit better without...the extra shading but fjdhf idk im out of practice  11:46 Sun Jul 3

Firestar (D) - For Approval
Um ... I would really like some advice on this ... please. I'm so sorry, I tried but I just don't even. 23:14, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Add more stripes  07:46 Sun Jun 26 

The pale chest seems a bit hard-edged; could you smudge/blur it a little? 17:54 Sun Jun 26

Re-uploaded: I think I messed up the stripes. Should I redo them? 18:44, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the other images are a little thicker, and on the belly make them follow the curve of the belly more rather than being straight? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:06, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

the stripes on his other images are also more orange and not as dark. 07:05, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:41, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

I think they could be thickened just a little more and sofetened a little bit, colour's much better. 21:12, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thanks trolly :) 15:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Where is the torn ear? He has it in his warrior image, he should have it in this one too.

Re-uploaded: I'm so sorry for forgetting that! 16:05, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

This is pretty :) can you add some shading to his right ear?

Squirrelflight (D) - For Approval
I'd also like advice for this. 23:51, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Make her tail bigger and fluffier. Can't tell the difference between it and the regular tails rn. This looks really nice though, tbh. 23:54 Sat Jun 25

Re-uploaded: Thanks berry! 04:28, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a tad bit more and make the tail fur a tad longer close to the tip, maybe? I can redline the lines if you need.  07:45 Sun Jun 26 

Re-uploaded: 18:45, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the color a little too dull compared to the other images? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:08, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the tail, and give it a bit more 'fluff', to put it that way? 05:37 Mon Jun 27

Re-uploaded: 19:41, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

You should make the tail have more stripes. 01:50, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Erm, there are several of them and I made them match the older deputy. I'd like another opinion on that. 14:34, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

the tip of her tail should be coloured in at least. (I think) 21:12, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think you need more tail stripes, just thicken a couple of them toward the middle so they don't look quite as uniform 04:14, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Sorry I can't really get tail stripes right. 15:30, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Bluestar (D) - For Approval
Had trouble with the eyes, I'll redo them in the next upload, be nice if I did something wrong. --Gardenglaze 02:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

ear should be ripped. 02:30, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please reupload under File:Bluestar.deputy.png? Your original file has two .png's, so I renamed it, but please upload under this file name. 03:00, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure velvetmoon has already got this reserved. 03:20, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I should quit this and let velvetmoon take over? --Gardenglaze 04:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I apologise if this offends anyone. But I do have both Bluestar and Oakheart reserved. I will be posting the images soon. 15:05, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Upload thought I would just upload on this. 20:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading. 21:19, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe give it a little more depth towards the base of the tail? Some volume, so to speak? 22:49 Mon Jun 27

crop this to the lineart. 21:11, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make sure it consistently fills the area 04:13, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Got it to look better with smudged shading though I'm not 100% sure I like it. 12:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 12:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the butt please?  18:42 Wed Jun 29 

Reupload butt shading has been expanded! :) 10:21, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth out the head and tail shading a bit? 02:47 Fri Jul 1

Reupload 08:59, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more. 21:19, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smooth as I'm gonna get it! 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks really hard edged compared to all her other images. Are you sure you can't smooth it more, or maybe even lighten it? 01:43, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I thought shading was an artists choice. But I blurred it insted of smudged it so it matches. 05:54, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Oakheart (D) - For Approval
This time I used MS paint to do the eyes so they don't look like crap. --Gardenglaze 05:13, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I'm fairly sure Velvet holds the reservation on this one as well

I hope nobody has Stonefur reserved. --Gardenglaze 19:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

Where should I post mine? Should I just take over or wait for this to be archived. 16:20, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Upload I know I need to smooth out the shading will fix next upload. 20:10, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload fixed the shading a bit. 10:30, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on this image could be smoothed out a little as well. 21:20, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload it's not right... 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Stonefur (D) - Declined
Let me guess, Velvet has this one reserved as well? --Gardenglaze 19:41, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

No, but you should have it reserved on the reservation table, if you want to do this image. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:12, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

No date on the table/reservation, despite being asked to do so. Declining.

I can't find the reservation table.--Gardenglaze 19:57, June 30, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

It's right on the main page clearly marked with "current projects".

Mudpuddle (D) ~ for approval
I love fur texture --Cheetahfur (talk) 17:47, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Ooooh, this is good. Could you define the light on the hind leg, please?  18:23 Mon Jun 27 

Reuploaded --Cheetahfur (talk) 18:28, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

define the shading a little. 21:09, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a bit more and I can't quite tell where the light's coming from according to the legs 03:53, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) - For Approval
I will fix the shoulder/neck shading in a few minutes. 18:25 Wed Jun 29

Is the tail tip supposed to have almost non-existent shading? If it is, ignore me; I'm known for asking dumb questions and having bad eyesight. =P

Define the shading on the legs, and define the earpink. I don't know if that's how it should be so ignore the last one if it is supposed to be like that --  14:50, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Not changing the ear pink. But I am redoing the shading because this looks horrible. 02:19 Sun Jul 3

Reuploaded 01:10 Mon Jul 4

I can't really tell where the light's coming from... The tail haunch and head says from the back, but the shoulders and back doesn't quite seem to match :-/ 03:58, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Runningnose (D) - For Approval
lol whats art 00:35, 06/30/2016

Define the light on the tail.

Redtail (D) ~ For Approval
Nope, that's not texture. That's just the way I shaded it.  <span style="">14:28 Thu Jun 30 

I love the tail. Can you define the belly shading a tad bit? <span style="">22:43 Fri Jul 1

thanks :)  <span style="">08:13 Sun Jul 3 

Sunstar (D) - For Approval
my sweet son <span style="">16:22, 06/30/2016

Smooth out the tail shading a bit. Seems kinda hard-edged compared to the rest of the body's shading.

Sorry I think the tail shading looks just fine. 01:40, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Seedpelt (D) ~ For Approval
ill fix upt he shading later....im so tired 21:59, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the tail shading?

reuploaded 14:31, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Rainsplash (D) - For Approval
mmm <span style="">02:45 Fri Jul 1

This is pretty, Spooky! Define the light on the tail 23:03, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (D) - For Approval
Same color pallet as the rest of his set 03:11, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. D) - For Approval
I'm confused on which deputies I can do, but I'm pretty sure I can do this one? Comments? <span style="">13:36 Fri Jul 1

Define the shading. To clarify you can do any deputy image that is on the characters page and is not reserved. 11:13, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">12:10 Sat Jul 2

Timberfur (D) ~ For Approval
Comment? 16:23, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail and define the light on the head 23:02, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes don't seem to be showing. 23:13, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. I accidentally reuploaded the wrong image; that's why the changes refused to show. 17:14, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Mallowtail (W) ~ For Approval
attempted to emulate my own cat for this one, not sure I did her justice 19:21, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded adjusted a few things 06:43, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Is that supposed to be pale or white? I think it's white, but my phone's bejng weird with color... anyways could you define the facial shading a tiny bit? is this Squawky???

reuploaded its white, and yes its squawky. 14:04, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (D) -For Approval
20:32, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the hard-edged band of shading behind the shoulder and on the haunch and smude the pelt into the ear-pink a touch more. This is super pretty! 04:01, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks ^^ 11:58, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Brightwhisker (D) - For Approval
I had fun making this one :3 Comments? <span style="">20:35 Fri Jul 1

Nice! Blur the shading a bit more. 21:24, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It's also leaking some on the underside of the belly. <span style="">22:41 Fri Jul 1

Sharpen the markings; it looks a little over blurred compared to the leader 23:01, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How do I sharpen the markings? <span style="">02:29 Sat Jul 2

Fix your light direction. Faced says > and tail says <. 22:49, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not sure if the light is correct now, but I switched the shading on the tail to the other side, if that was what you meant. <span style="">01:25 Sun Jul 3

Leafstorm (D) -For Approval
21:45, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Super pretty! If the light's coming from the front, i think y ou could stretch the haunch highlight a bit further up 04:02, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks ^^ 11:57, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

Russetfur (Alt. D) - For Approval
I lightened her pallet a bit to better match her image in the manga. I'm gonna put her alt. warrior up for tweak nom. so it'll match better. 23:31, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (D) ~ For Approval
I actually like this 13:15, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Cloudstar (D) ~ For Approval
smile 16:20, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D Alt) - For Approval
Killed it. Killed it. Killed it.

Leopardstar (D Alt2) - For Approval
Took the tawny coloring from Oakheart.

Define shading on the body -- 14:12, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Was already working on that before you commented.

Hawkfrost (D) - For Approval
23:55, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) - For Approval
23:55, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Petalfall (D) - For Approval
....can I get the file name fixed? Looks like the "L" key on my laptop was sticking. <span style="">01:59 Mon Jul 4

Beetail (D) ~ For Approval
this pattern