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Littlecloud(mc alt 2) ~ for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​​​​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to the alt mentioned above by Echo, this would have to be renamed File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. Mind fixing that real quick Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^

17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The darker stripes on the face should be thinner, and all of the stripes should be more jagged^^ There's also a slight layer of texture going underneath them, on the mca ~

Define your light source. Its pretty hard to distinguish it. If you need help with it, you may find the Apprentice Tutorials helpful. 16:43 Sun Dec 30

Still working? 00:05, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

If you are still working, there's this area outside the right hind leg that shouldn't be filled in. I'll send you a screenshot later when I have time to get on the computer.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:26, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go!Potato Flakin (talk) 04:24, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, sorry for the break, I just had thingd going on, and life, but I got it up! : )Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:57, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, that shading tho! I dont know what I was doing, but I fixed the shadingIm Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yes, much better. There are some things that still need to be addressed, but take your time. The stripes need to be smudged and sharpened a bit more. I would recommend you take the colors of his apprentice, or medicine cat apprentice. The earpink is much lighter on the other images, and the two stripes on the face are blotchy. Seperate them so they are two stripes, then smooth and sharpen them to match the kit. Whiten the white, and define the shading (have you tried tinting your shading? It's magic) This is very good Owlbite, you are doing well.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I sort-of like it.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite! Whiten the white on the legs, thin out the face stripes, and define the shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:12, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, face stripes cant get any thiner. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:26, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I understand. Where's your lightsouce here? If there is one please define it. Potato Flakin (talk) 04:29, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading too? I can't tell where the light source is either, but I think that may just be because I can't make out where a lot of the shading is. 13:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC) I will definitely the light, but look at the light in the eyes.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 16:38, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't have white markings or pale around the earpink^

Lighten the earpink a little more, and remember, don't stress, the lightsource and other things are and easy fix, take your time.=)Potato Flakin (talk) 01:36, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

spooky, look at the offical art, look, there is white marks. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:59, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I cut the white down, but it is there on the offical art, and if I define the shading, it will make it look... just... bad. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:06, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I’m quite sure it’s supposed to be that pale color around the ears. I matched the same image you’re matching to when I did the other images in this alt set

Re-up, okay.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 03:03, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Owlbite, don't kill me, but I'm still very confused about your lightsource. I cannot see where the shading is.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:30, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that help? I removed some shading from the direct place of the light sorce, wich needed to be fixed anyways.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:00, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the shading darker? i think it'll make it more visible. that pattern is looking good 11:44, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, yeet.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:41, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png not Littlecoud -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:38, 1/09/2019 ]

Actually, it's not fully wrong. There's just a duplicate of File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png that's spelled wrong. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:40, 1/09/2019 ]

Define shading every but the paws. Define light on the paws. It's coming along! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:55, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, sorry about my splng!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:56, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry if it's a bother, but the paws' light could still be defined greatly. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 23:00, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I tryed, let me know if it needs more.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:10, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a lot of depth to the shading. I cannot see it. Also the leg stripes seem to be ending abruptly..?Potato Flakin (talk) 23:19, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that is as dark as it will get, if you need me to do it more, msg me on discord, okay? because I need to talk to you, and get your help(and you cant do that here).<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:39, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the stripe at the top of the tail tip; it should be thicker to match the mca, and also even out the coloring and amount of the stripes on the front legs; there should be at least 5 on the < front leg, and 4 on the > front one

Re-up, the count seems a little... over of a responce, but I did it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:50, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light everywhere. You may find the apprentice tutorials helpful.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:16, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes a LOT. The leg stripes especially are unintelligible from everything else. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:28, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

The base color on the back leg nearest to us has white on the edges, the ear pink could be a little more defined. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:37, 1/10/2019 ]

Realized it is in the mca, sorry. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:38, 1/10/2019 ]

There's some waste outside this ear.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:52, January 11, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm.. also what color are the berries? One screen tells me they're white but another screen tells me it's light green.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:05, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

cant work, im away from my drawing tablet, but the berries, I thought they were leaves, and they had little white flowers on them, I looked it up for refrence then first making it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:50, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

catmint and borage were the plants<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:55, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Creative idea Owlbite! But since I'm confused about the color of the berries, I think they should be one color.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:38, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

there are no berries, they are flowers, and they are ment to be purple.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

The berries and leaves and be whatever color you want. Could you also make your pupil black? In addition, you seem to be having some trouble with light source. The shading should, for the limbs, only be on one side and not cover the entire limb. That's how we get that "3D effect" to show mass and depth. Your lightsource seems to be coming from the right, so the shading should only be on the left side of the limbs. What you have going on with the tail, flank and face is good. I've created a red line to help ya! Try to keep the shading to one side of the limbs like I demonstrated in red (the arrow is the direction your light is hitting your cat), even when blurring it. I hope this helps! ^^ 01:21, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

I WILL re-up later today or tomarow, but im working with photoshop, and it crashed ;~;' and school... but I WILL get them up!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:16, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, FINALY! And Vec, about making it black, as I have been told, and as I will say, that is my prefrence, and if you want, I will make it darker, but I prefer to not have it black. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:50, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink, I'm not seeing it. Colorpick off the apprentice possibly?Potato Flakin (talk) 03:00, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

re-up, all the colors are 100% correct. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more, and there's no stripes on the white part of the paws.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:13, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh, I was unaware the pupil didn't have to be black. My apologies, then. ^^ 13:27, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, OH! now I see whatseemed off on the stripes! I couldnt tell! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 15:47, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes on the face? On his other images the lighter areas and stripes on his body appear more textured (not sure how else to describe it), could you try making them a rougher to match? On his other images, there's only four, thicker stripes on his tail too. You've improved so much since your first upload, keep it up!

16:37, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:12, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading? 13:17, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the shading. Define the light on the herbs and lighten the face stripes to match this. I like this!Potato Flakin (talk) 02:04, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the face stripes are correct, I adsked spooky for the color hex.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:27, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Burnt. I can't see the shading well. Please define the shading.

Thin out the face stripes again and define the earpink. I think you're overblurring the earpink which is making it disappear.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:20, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Pose is from a reference, I can show it if need be. <span style="">20:10 Wed Jan 2

Sun these are absolutely astounding! Could you add either a tag or bell to the collar? There’s usually one. :) 20:16, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

Soooo cute! Can you move the collar a little bit down the neck? It kinda looks like it's choking them right now.. ^^' Also, the forearm closest to us looks overly thick. 23:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

woah!! love everyhting on this charart, i cant wait to see the next one. Starclanwilldarkme2 (talk) 00:16, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing, Sun! Could you possibly make that <-- front leg a bit longer to match the length of the other? It seems a bit shorter. 03:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the lineart on the hind paws just a bit? 03:56, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

The front paw facing us feels a bit too chubby compared to the rest of the legs. Also, while I do understand what you're going for with the lil fatty fluff on the haunch to define the tummy, it looks a bit off. Plump cats don't really have their fat protruding past their haunch, and with them laying down like this, the fat would go lower to touch the ground bc of gravity. These are super cute ;; I adore the toe beans so so much!! —​​

Could be my personal preferences, but could you make the long haired's fur less.. spiky and give it more variation?

Hi Sun! You don’t have a limit like other art and take the time you need, but I just wanted to confirm that you’re still working? :) 17:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I am! I'm just trying to enjoy my last week of break before the semester! I'll upload soon! <span style="">18:46 Tue Jan 8

I love it! If it dosent get aproved here, my wiki, Complete Warriors Wiki needs some. :) -Texaswild

No real rush, Sun, but this is just a bump in case you've gotten busy and forgotten about the blanks. (and also a reminder that they're still here in case anyone needs to comment) ​

--> this eye should be moved slightly or expanded in size.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:28, January 16, 2019 (UTC)​

Cinderheart (Alt App 2) - For Approval
It's.... interesting, to say the least. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:59, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink? —

A good effort, Dark! However, on the picture, i'm picking up small hints of white around the hindlegs, so there's likely a bit of white along the belly, she should have more stripes, the pale should be softer, there isn't any earpink at all as far as I can tell, and she has some brown in her pelt. If the brown is there, sharpen/define it because it sho7uld be fairly visible. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:18, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

A lot of earpink is leaking onto the head, I can't see any earpink in <-- this ear, and the stripes need to be sharpened. And her back looks blue..?Potato Flakin (talk) 01:32, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

In addition to adding more stripes like Squid said, I think extending the ones on the haunch all the way would help it match better. 01:40, January 9, 2019 (UTC)\

can you blur/smudge the stripes?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:12, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Pretty sure this needs to be short-furred, as that's how it is in the image. 02:35, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Some golden needs to be added to as you can clearly see it on the official image. The stripes should also be thinner and add some more. There doesn't seem to be a dorsal stripe either. This is really good though! Also could you possibly lessen the the chest white, there seems to be less on the image. 10:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Before I do anything, should I blur or sharpen the stripes? There seems to be conflicting critiques on that. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:17, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I think they're better off being softened. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:19, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

i think what they meant is to soften the stripes by blurring them or smudging them, but extending the stripes so they come to points at the ends. not exactly sure though.

18:53, January 12, 2019 (UTC) They should be extended and softened, I don't see why they would need to be sharpened, unless it's what Ari said, but the stripes on the TUG image don't really appear to come to any points. Nice job so far!

21:29, January 12, 2019 (UTC) Keep in mind that you only have 3 days left to upload. Are you still working?

Iirc, I think it was decided she'd be getting a shorthair blank for this? The UG image matched her current charart fine enough, just that she's would need a short hair blank, but I might be wrong. —​​

Judging by Fox's comment, this should be declined due to lack of work, as it's been over three days since they asked. ​​​

can i take over? if darkshadow wants to continue working on it, ill hand it back. 13:56, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. took over. 14:50, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Define the brown on her body some. It's more prominent on the TUG image. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 14:54, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

reup. not sure if thats enough, but i tried. made it slightly more saturated than the color picked from the image. 14:58, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading just a tick or two?

There's waste here, here, and here .Potato Flakin (talk) 01:07, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

reup. also, your links didn't work, but i found the waste 08:43, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Super minor, but the stripes appear to fade across the chest but they are still sorta present. Do you mind adding those? 13:16, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reup. yes i do mind no jk. tell me if this is good– not sure if i did what you meant. 14:37, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Apprentice Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I'm absolutely proud :) All colours from the alt star. Comments? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

You should be proud! Define the shading on the tail and paws? 18:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shading a little on the shoulder back and haunch, add some to the forelegs and hindlegs farthest from us and soften the stripes, maybe add a handful more if you're able. This is very good! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:47, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the stripes some too? 18:51, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Screams bc I keep forgetting to mention things. Sharpen the gold on the shoulder and foreleg a little, and there's waste between the whiskers. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Is it better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

<-- this hind leg needs more white, there's a lot on the warrior alt. Also friendly reminder to upload under File:Feathertail.apprentice.alt2.png. It was misspelled earlier (it's fixed now)Potato Flakin (talk) 23:15, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm and the stripe placement would end up matching the warrior, as would everything else to it, since the warrior's the first in the set. Would you mind adding some white/very pale gray hairs up into the earpink, to match the set? I also think there'd be more, but thinner, stripes on the tail. You're doing excellent with this, by the way

Could you define/add some more stripes on the front paw furthest from us and the back paw furthest from us? And add some cream to the hind paw furthest from us too. 03:25, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Nice image overall. I'll promote you into an apprentice.

Reups <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Could you maybe blur the white a little bit on her right front paw? -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:42, 1/10/2019 ]

Sure, I'll do it when I'll come home :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Reups :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Could you define the shading overall, especially on the gray? 22:03, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I do think there'd need to be more visible pale parts on the belly and haunch, alt. warrior seems to have them, and that's first in set

Reups any better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Also I'm not going to be able to work on it till tomorrow morning (UTC time) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

The shading seems blotchy, for a lack of a better word. It seems to be darker in places and non-existent where it should be (for example the legs). It's also overblurred in places.

Reupsss <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Can you darken the shading on the forelegs please. 13:00, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the inside hind leg. Your doing great! ^^

13:57, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Can you define the shading depth on all the legs? I think the stripes on the face need to be connected to the eyes too. Might be my eyes, but there appears to be leaky shading on the back. On the hind leg closest to us, maybe move the white so it's against the line art of the haunch? it looks a little off in the middle like it is. It also appears less soft on the warrior. You've done a great job on this so far!!

21:23, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

The base looks a bit too light, could you darken it a bit? Sharpen the white too.

01:03, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit to match the roughness the ones on the other images have, if you would

On the front paws, the white doesn't match the placement portrayed on the star, and it's leaking a bit. —​​

Reups --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 08:16, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the white a bit more? might be my eyes, but it looks like it hasn't changed at all.

16:44, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, any specific places it should be sharpened? --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 20:26, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

For reference. The red is where the white should be on the paw if you're following the star's pattern of having white underarms, blue is where the white is leaking, and green is where the white needs to be sharpened. —​​

Ok, thanks! --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 10:50, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups yep yep :) --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 12:35, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

We should hardly be able to see white on the shoulder looking at the other alts, and there's too much white on <- side of the haunch. you're getting there! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 14:57, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 16:12, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the hind paw furthest from us? 13:17, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do it when my brother will give me the computer --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 20:23, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded--<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat  09:20, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Half Moon (toeh) ~ For Approval


06:26, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading Malina457 (talk) 06:32, January 13, 2019 (UTC)malina

its supposed to be rougher shading, it just stands out more since there is no texture. may i get a second opinion on this please?

06:34, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with malina and i think it could be "smoothed out" by defining the shading depth or adding lighter texture lines so that there is more gradient to the shading 07:49, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

there should be some stomach shading too. 07:54, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm could you round out the shading on the shoulder so it flows into the arm? Currently flows with the back, which looks a bit off

Reuploaded

14:39, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the stomach shading, it currently does not go with your light source. 17:33, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lessen the shading on the front arm and also add some shading at the bottom of the chest? —​

There's shading leaking on top of the haunch from the belly. 21:14, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

I honestly don't think the shading needs to be lessened at all on the arm. It does look pretty good as it is, and some users prefer thicker shading. (Scarlet comes to mind when I say this).. Ari, I'll leave that up to you whether or not you want to lessen it or keep it as-is. ​

can you add some shading near the chest area? it looks a little flat. 13:52, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry this is taking so long, I haven’t had time to update this due to school and basketball.

11:45, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (ToEH) - CBA
all colors from the other images, of which I'm the OA of. My precious. ​​

Small very minor things, but there's two pixels I think would be white here at the base of the tail, and one speck of orange that's leaking from the shoulder here, where the shading is leaking a little from the lineart as well. I also think the transition from ginger to white could be smoothed on the upper half of the tip-ish of the tail; this does look amazing btw, best pattern combo ever

Super small but could you smudge these areas a teensy bit more? —​

Re-uploaded. ​​

Could you define the tail shading and maybe expand it some? 16:32, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the tail shading, though I do agree it needs expansion. Ooh this is pretty, love the pupil placement Jayce!Potato Flakin (talk) 02:05, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. An attempt was made, but given how I shaded this (white and ginger each have their own shading layers), it isn't the easiest thing to do while still keeping it consistent with the rest of the image. ​

Love the colors; CBA?

Cloud With Storm in Belly (ToEH) - For Approval
04:43, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink is leaking a bit, and also the shading on the ear facing away from us looks pinkish. —​​

Could you possibly either smooth out the shading or lighten it a few ticks? To me, it looks like the shading and base pelt clash with one another, but I feel doing either of what I suggested might help and still keep the depth this has. ​​

There'd probably be a little less shading on the tailtip, given the light is shining like > way

Reuploaded. 01:52, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light and shading on the ear furthest from us? I can't tell if it's all ear pink or covered in shading. 13:14, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:48, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Rain(toeh) ~ For Approval
I love these blanks! --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:32, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

He's said to only have one eye missing, and since his elder's side is the one that's missing, this eye would still be here. Also, darken and define your shading. The bright red blends in too much. —​

reups --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:32, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Can you please change the tint of your shading? I know you can pick any colour that you'll like, but I feel like it's too neon-ish. --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 11:19, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

try changing the shading layer's mode to multiply and see if it makes things better 13:17, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

It's not neonish to me? It's on multiply too. Second opinion please. --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    13:35, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I agree with cloud on the neon thing. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 13:44, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

^ if the layer is on multiply, decrease the saturation and darkness. it does look neon 13:49, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

add facial shading too while you're at it

Reups How about now? --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    14:01, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the white by the eye by the slightest.Potato Flakin (talk) 14:14, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'm still struggling to see the shading well. The color isn't dark enough, it's too bright still and continues to blend in. You're better off sticking to darker colors than light, bright and midtone can probably work sometimes but what you have I personally doesn't think it works. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 14:52, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

At this point I can't even see what's shading and what's not. Try and desaturate the red, but at this point I recommend finding a different colour to use entirely since the red blends in way too much. —​

Define the eye depth a little, as well^^

Reups meh. --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    09:48, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the stomach area and perhaps expand it from the back haunch? 13:13, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Idk about this --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    13:44, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading along his spine. 14:01, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth more.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:21, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

reups idk --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    06:54, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

reup x3 I reup the wrong one and got confused --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    06:56, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Into The Wild Minor TC Queen 3 (Q) - For Approval
I like how this looks but i have no idea if I titled the file or header correctly but im doing it anyway (・・；) ill change it if needbe but for now I'll just put it under this. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:22, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Hi ended up renaming to File:OS-1.queen-3.png for ya, almost got it right, but it is much different than how we normally do. If you could continue uploading under the new filename, that'd be great^^

Oh, yes, will do! I was a little confused on the system when I named it first and then put it up. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:34, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Ooh I likey. Desaturate the earpink, it's a little neon. (This queen reminds me of Greenflower, one of my favorite characters =D)01:12, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:14, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth, and the light on the front legs?

I also think the light should be defined on --> this hind leg, unless I'm failing with your light source and that leg needs to stay in shadow.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:07, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is on the right (hitting from <- direction), so I believe that with the light source the farthest hindleg should be fine? also going to get that reup in in a moment. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:09, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:24, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Where's the pupil in <-- this eye? All I see is the eye white.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:37, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice, and I've seen other images use something similar to this. I think it's perfectly fine. That being said, could you define the edges of the shading a bit? I know it's there, but it seems a wee bit flat in places like the stomach/main part of the body and the face. ​​

Could you define the shading and light on both ears and the light on the hind leg/paw furthest from us? 13:19, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Into The Wild Minor TC Queen 4 (Q) ~ For Approval
First black cat, so I'm a bit unsure hm.. —​​

Ooh pretty! Define the light on --> this hind leg?Potato Flakin (talk) 02:01, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aah, thank you! —​​

It might just be my eyes, but this appears more dark gray than black. Could you maybe darken it just a bit? 13:10, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also just realized the double .png in the file name.. oops. —​

has been renamed^^

OS-1 Queen 2 - For Approval
dunno how i feel about this

Define the shading. I love this, and I finally got around your siggie =)Potato Flakin (talk) 03:15, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks

Darken the dark markings. It says she's "a tabby queen with distinctive black markings". These look dark brown. Define the shading on the legs, and the tail shading looks.. I'm not sure, flat?Potato Flakin (talk) 03:42, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

it still looks a bit brown to me. 07:43, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded better?

Her description is 'a tabby queen, but I can't see any stripes except the ones that or on the tail / feet / face. Tabby means stripes on all the body. --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 10:32, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

It doesn't. exist.

Sorry, my bad --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 12:09, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

There’s a little waste caught in he chest fur^^

I think the brown areas should have tabby marks since she said to have black markings and be a tabby. 20:52, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Mink, as Fox just said. This is a pointed tabby, meaning the stripe placement is perfectly acceptable. ​​

i mean the wording of the description is a little vague. do the black markings fit being tabby stripes, or does she have a brown tabby pattern and have black markings? i think its up for interpretation 23:26, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

It should be fine.. all the book says is "tabby queen with distinctive black markings", which this does fit

Can you define the earpink or change the color of it? It sorta blends in with the pelt color you have here.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:22, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

OS-1 Apprentice 1 ~ For Approval


02:41, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink. This pattern.. I likey.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:14, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Is this a tabby.. or mottled? Can you make the tabby stripes more obvious/visible?

Re-uploaded.

18:13, January 17, 2019 (UTC) Could you lighten the shading?

Re-uploaded.

00:13, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Mottled Tabby Rogue ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:28, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:30, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:39, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on both the ears? 13:04, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:57, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Ginger queen (TC) ~ For Approval
ginger cats <3

ShadowClan Tortoiseshell 1 ~ For Approval
I still live believe it or not Malina457 (talk) 22:45, January 17, 2019 (UTC)malina

Yep Malina you still exist XD. Define the stripes, and the black looks brown. There's also some waste outside the tail, let me know if you need a screenshot.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:48, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Renamed to File:OS-1.warrior-5.png if you could keep uploading under that, to match conventions and all

The black is kinda brown, if thats ok. I'll define the stripes though, but im redoing the whole pattern to my liking Malina457 (talk) 23:10, January 17, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reups Malina457 (talk) 00:40, January 18, 2019 (UTC)malina

Where for art thou is the earpink?Potato Flakin (talk) 00:45, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

reups defined it Malina457 (talk) 01:00, January 18, 2019 (UTC)malina

Rising Storm Tortoiseshell Queen ~ For Approval
I did this a while back as practice and I'm finally glad to use it. 23:03, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and eye depth. Pretty.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:59, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

The eye depth is fine to me, could I get a second? 00:09, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the shading and eye depth clearly imo. Could you actually smooth it out on the hind leg/paw furthest from us? 00:21, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I tried to smooth it out as best I could. I adore this one ^-^ 08:00, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Tortoiseshell queen (RC, OS-1) ~ For Approval
First time doing a tortoiseshell. I tried.

23:21, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good, are torties suppose to have white if they aren't cited on it? Also can you define the shading. 23:23, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm this needs to have more patches. Tortoiseshells have a lot of patterns, you can choose which one you want.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:58, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Mink's right. She's cited as a tortoiseshell so no white. And the tortoiseshell pattern is honestly Thunder's choice...they can add more when they remove the white. Add some shading to <-- side of the face and smooth out all the shading, too. 00:01, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the front legs. Waste beside the <- front leg

Blur the patches and there's waste outside <-- this front leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:24, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

easiest way to get around the dumb no white thing is to just make it cream or something if you don't want to get rid of it. 09:23, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Dark Mottled Tabby Rogue ~ For Approval
Might need to make it darker... 00:18, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think it should be darkened, Adderfang looks like this. Define the front leg shading?Potato Flakin (talk) 00:25, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

What does Adderfang have to do with this rogue? I think the darkness would be up to Vec, great job btw! 00:48, January 18, 2019 (UTC)