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Cloudspots (W) - Tweaked
Defined shading. OA was Leafstrike. Comments? 01:46, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I know this probably wasn't part of what you were supposed to do, but the earpink looks a very un-natural shade of pink, so maybe you should desaturate it a little or just change the shade al-together. Also, the shading is really dark; I can barely see the lineart. Can you lighten it a little please? 02:01, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine.. 02:20, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think Sunny's right. While I can see the lineart, it does look an little bit to dark to me, might be my screen though. 02:35, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

He's a black cat. Not dark grey. The lineart wouldn't be visible in the darker spots. I think the shading is fine. 02:55, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I guess that sounds right.... but the earpink still needs to be fixed imo  02:59, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:10, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on the tail 02:26, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think it's fine. 03:56 Mon Dec 17

I had shading this dark, and I got told I had to lighten it. ._. Can you lighten it juuuust a smidge? Like, nothing real drastic.

I disagree, it looks fine. 21:11, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Then why was I always told to lighten the shading, when mine was just as dark? Can you at least blur it a tad? The white's also starting to look a tad gray.. but that could just be me.

Not every image is the same. And this image really does start to look dark gray if it's lightened. It's fine as is. But yes, it could be blurred a bit more. 18:53, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I messed around with it a little. Hopefully it looks better. 00:51, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (Ki) ~ Redone
do not ask me to define the earpink it's the same colour as the warrior okay. Anyways, redone for stripes. Cooments? 08:58 Sun Dec 16

Can you maybe add a bit more stripes to him? I know that since it's a kit blank, it would be hard, so if you can't that's fine. 20:54, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

OMG so adorable<3333 define the earpink. 03:51, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

If I define the earponk, it will not match his warrior and apprentice. The earpink can straight from the warriors .xcf and I'm not changing it if I can help it. 03:56 Mon Dec 17

I think it has plenty enough stripes Misty, except on the leg.... that seems to be lacking a bit. 17:23, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded some stripes for you runningkit 01:07 Wed Dec 19

earponk xD Could you define the shading between the front legs a touch? 21:33, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (W) - Redone
My Brighty! <3 I reworked the patches, stripes, and shading. Though it's the same image, probably enough to call it a redo. OA was me 00:19, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Shading seems kinda flat. Define it?

Re-uploaded. I hope I don't turn her gray again... 00:31, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks grey again. Expand the highlights, especially on the face and shoulder. 05:50, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:37, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

She's still looking gray....why not try shading the ginger and the white on two different layers? (that's what I do with black and white cats)

It already is... 21:20, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Ah, okay. Then perhaps lighten the shading on the white? (sorry, didn't know that ^^;;)

Do you think the stripes could be blurred a bit more when they touch the white? The other images tend to do that. 21:35, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think I can make the white shading much lighter... It's already at like 17% opacity... And I kinda want to keep the stripes and maybe nominate the others for a quick tweak. I think it makes them looks less paintbrushy, but I can change it if others think I should 00:10, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with them looking paintbrushy on the others, but honestly, if you're gonna change the stripes, could you change the pattern please? This honestly isn't natural. 00:53, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

I really have to agree with Paleh on that note. I /do/ like how the stripes are, however. They're really neat. o3o

Re-uploaded I liked the stripes the old way. They made her look unique 03:16, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be light grey and add the pale under belly ( I think I should've just redone it...it barely matches. ) I also redid the shading because it was icky. OA was moi 03:36 Tue Dec 18

Define the shading a little more? 05:49, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:25 Tue Dec 18

Oh crud, just realised I've actually got three tweaks up... I'd forgotten about little Runningkit up there... So... withdrawing this so as to not break tweaking rules. 10:49 Tue Dec 18

Okay, we're back up. o3o 11:32 Wed Dec 19

Do you think you could blur the stripes a bit, and maybe lighten them? They really stick out against the pelt a lot. 21:31, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (A) - Tweaked
OA was me. I redid the shading and hopefully she doesn't look gray anymore... I have my doubts... 01:56, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more; it looks a little blotchy. 03:03, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, Sunny. This is how a lot of people do shading - so it shows depth. 11:34 Wed Dec 19

There's a patch of white or something on the chest. What is that? It's not really blurred much so looks weird and out of place.

Re-uploaded 21:23, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

The spot on the chest is still there. And define the shoulder "highlight". 22:21, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:13, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Her stomach/upper area there(the space between the haunch and the shoulder) looks a bit flat. Can you add a "highlight" there or something? 02:19, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

From the where the light is coming, I don't think there'd be a highlight on the back, but I can add another layer of shading for depth 03:19, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) ~ Tweaked
redid the shading (again).

Lighten it a bit more, blur the haunch shading, and define the shoulder and leg shading. 22:26, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This looks better in PS. .-.

Make the earpink a tad less neon? 22:41, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Cloudtail (W) ~ Tweaked
Ohlook I have Cloudtail's image again<3 I /think/ this was tweaked by Paleh after I redid it. Shading made the image look gray, and when I lightened it, I kinda accidentally murdered most of the shading. Sowweh. .-.

Frostfur (E) - Tweaked
Had the file for this still, so I just redid the shading (and earpink). Needed to be lightened and shading defined, and images needed to match. Last OA was me, comments? 20:41, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

I can't quite tell if the light is coming towards the face or the back and define the bottom of the ear-pink a bit more; it looks kinda whispy 00:15, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

The light is coming from the top right corner, and I personally think the earping is fine. It's supposed to be furry there. 00:51, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (W) - Tweaked
I swear this is tweaked. Lightened it, dodged some of the some spots to expand the highlights, and laid another layer of shading over. Tweaked for same reasons as above. Last OA Teldy, comments? 20:41, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Snowkit (OS) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for shading. 00:20, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define it, plz. Snowkit<3

Tinycloud (W) - Tweaked
Ehhh. OA was Dawnleaf with a tweak by me. 01:03, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a bit purple/pink to me... Can you fix that? o3o (but if it was intended or something, then it's fine)  02:18, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Tints are fine. They don't need to be changed. 02:51, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

I have to agree with Paleh on that note. ( that's cool how'd you do that? o.o  )

Actually, though the tint's fine, could you lighten the whole thin a bit more? 03:25, December 20, 2012 (UTC)