Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Lightningpelt- For approval
A minor character. Comments? Hawkfire Talk! 00:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

The white streak on her back would probably be on the lineart, rather than on the side of the pelt like it is now. Otherwise, great job, Hawkfire! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:26, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Icethroat, and also make the ear pink more of a fine triangular shape, and less of a bright pink color. -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦ Contribs 01:49, November 9, 2009 (UTC) Awesome! Um I don't really see anything *goes closer* Nope &#91;&#91;User:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;background:silver; color:goldenrod;&quot;&gt;&#39;&#39;&#39;Icestorm&#39;&#39;&#39;&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;sup&gt;&#91;&#91;User Talk:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;color:blue;&quot;&gt;How&#39;s the prey running?&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;/sup&gt; 02:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Make sure you make it slightly smaller, as we probably wouldn't be able to see it all. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:04, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the streak on the back, and worked on her stripes and ear pink. Hawkfire Talk! 19:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

nice work. but now I can hardley see the streak. maybe make it a bit bigger and longer. Darkmoon25

Your tabby stripes seem to be blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:56, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hawkfire Talk! 23:11, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok the image still looks good. but I can hardly see the ear pink and the streak looks more like a patch now then a streak. But good job Darkmoon25

This hasn't been updated in awhile. Please update soon.-- Darkhallows 11:04, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hawkey Rawr! LOL 19:36, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart around the neck area, and the lineart on the back is a bit too thin. Also, the ear pink is touching the bottom of the ear when it should be a fine triangular shape, kept inside the ear lineart. Fix these things, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦Contribs 13:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a week; please work on it or it will be declined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry about that! Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 21:46, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - The tabby stripes aren't as blurred on the shoulder as they are on the haunch. Streak looks great though. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:58, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

The upload log isnt working for me. I will try to update soon. Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:56, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Okay... I think (my opinion) the stripes look perfect. This is probally the best image I've ever done. I dont think they need to be blurred anymore, for the image will be ruined if I do so. Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:28, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I agree! It looks amazing!--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:37, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks purfect hawky!I like the stripes also.--Firepelt 23:16, December 17, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Then... Comments before approval?-- Darkhallows 12:21, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Mist where Sunlight Shimmers - For Approval
well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it?? *santa pool*  07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --Rainwhisker 09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --  Icy -chan  20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  pool*  07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.-- Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also Sandy   Talk   16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --  Icy -chan  21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better?? *Ivy pool*  06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look right, make it look like this. Also, maybe make the end of the tail a little bit darker than the rest of the tail (just use the burn tool a couple of times), so that it shows the shading more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *angel's  bells*  06:38, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks need to be a little lighter. Other than that, great job! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded i think it's strange...-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:24, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... the mud streaks look too green still and need to be slightly thinner I think. I'd personally use a size 5 brush and blur well. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:44, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

reploadedi started it all over... -- *Ivy jingle jingle!!* 07:40, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink, maybe try changing the ear pink to a lighter or darker color, or making it thicker. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:07, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:33, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

It looks to hot pink. When you're picking your color, go to the red, and choose a salmony color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:47, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:59, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Hareflight- For Approval
Here's Hareflight. Her description looked easy so I took a go at it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:49, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job, Hawkey. Just blur the shading and highlights a bit so that they don't look so messy, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:31, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the color a little bit more natural, right now it looks dul--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:35, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened color, and blurred shading and ighlights to the best of my ability. THe upload log works again! :D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 23:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the tips of it's paws, the fur gets lighter. Fix that unless it's part of the description of him. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - Maybe add some shading around the belly/middle section? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:05, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a while. Please work on it soon or it will have to be declined. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 15:37, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The upload log isnt working for me. I will try to update soon. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:56, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Swiftstar (L)-For Approval
Is he okay? Warriors808 22:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't bad but you need to blur the shading and highlights. you might also want to add some shading to his left side.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:08, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Are you even online? Great for your first try! Just do what Ashy said and he'll be amazing! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:22, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Also, he needs ear pink --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The space right between his hind leg and his right fore-arm is white, it needs to be gray--Nightfall101 06:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his leg, it looks. . . smudged. And yes, add ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched for 7 days. Please work on it soon--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:08, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Night, Black hasn't been on because she was on vacation. She went to the cape. Anyways she's online right now so she'll upload it because she already had it done but it wasn't uploaded. Anyways Black, for the image maybe blur the earpink some more and the lineart on the leg looks....blurred. Fill that in black with the bucket tool and I think he'll be ready. Nice job for your first Charart. Oh and Night she works on these but she doesn't have time to upload them. She is always busy. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:32, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't know--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Gone on vacation or not, Icestorm, Nightfall was right to say something; if you're not going to be able to update the image for a while, either leave a message saying so, or withdraw the image but leave it reserved so you can put it up when you get back. Image-wise, make the nose color a light gray instead of a pinkish color, don't have the ear pink filling up the entire ear, just in the middle of the ear, and make the ear pink more like the color of Smoketalon or Graymist's ear.

Also, the shading still needs blurred a lot more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. She didn't know. She is only a newcomer. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blacktail called me and I told her what happened and she said she is re-doing this. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of... strange. Make it smaller, and less inward. Blur it a bit as well. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. It looks too bright to me.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 08:57, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I'll TRY to fix it. I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BAD!at Chararts :( Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 22:14, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

DON'T decline this. I am working on it with the help of Icestorm and Minnowclaw. Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 13:06, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Just for fun when I was re-doing Swiftstar I made him into a long haired cat. Is that okay? Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 00:51, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

well, Swiftstar is a WindClan cat so I personally think it better if he were shorthaired. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:50, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

DON'T DECLINE THIS! Warriors808 just called me saying she's working on this and she is trying to blur the shading it's just she says it's hard. Could anyone like be her mentor? -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 14:28, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

try lighting up the shades a bit it really works

It's beautiful, I just love what you did with the eyes. I think the ear pink need to be blurred though. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 04:19, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) - For Approval
My second charart. Comments? --  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is incredible! Just two things, first of all I think I can see a gray speck on his belly. And then (This might just be me being picky) but the face looks a little to dark. Maybe lighten up on the shading there?--Nightfall101 20:59, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Holly!!! I agree with Night that the face is kinda too dark. And maybe blur a little the shading and the pink in the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

i love it! although, i agree also, the face is a bit too dark and shade the ear. Otherwise, its fantastic! -- ♥Shine star♥  23:31, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks =). Better now?  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is looking good. But there are two spots where the shading doesn't connect with the lineart. Right on his butt, (yeah, I said it =]) And the bottom of his front right paw.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:07, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart looks as if it is blurred. Blur the fur, and lighten up a bit, especially on the paws. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The tail looks really dark. But I'm picky :)--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid this one, I hope it looks better now ^^  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is amazing! Just darken the ear pink a tad. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 16:13, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --  Holly... leaf or berry?

Nettlepaw (a) For approval
My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? -- ♥Shine star♥  19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar ♥Shine ]] star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (MC) -- For approval
OK, Hollyleaf USED to be here, but I took her down since it wasn't her current rank. So Kestrelflight! Tell me if it needs to be more grey. and yes, I will work on the whiskers and make it full size. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!12:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see any highlights.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:51, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is good Maple, but it doesn't really look any thing like his apprentice picture. And highlights arn't required. Although, shading is, which I don't see any of. --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I see a little shading, but there definitely needs to be some more added. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:30, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Shading needs to be blurred more. Man, I haven't been on here for awhile!! Oops! I mean cat. LOL! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded OK, blurred shading (but I could do it more...) Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:15, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Looks better. Make the ear pink a little bigger though--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 12:01, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the herbs- they don't look realistic. You might want to color some yellow or brown and make them look like herbs.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 02:35, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:36, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Milkfur(D)-For Approval


I know,the chest shading is messed up,I'll work on that.Suggestions?help?comments?critque?--Firepelt 22:28, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

can you take it out of the thumbnail so i can see it better? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

i would darken the ear pink a bit. -- ♥Shine star♥  22:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darken ear pink-Check --Firepelt 23:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

It's too small. You've made it in the size of the thumbnail version. You have to click on the image on the main page, then save it to your computer and edit it.-- Tinsel claw  23:40, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. i REUPLOADED IT,MADE THE FUR MORE OF A MILKY WHITE COLOR,FIXED THE EAR PINK.THE SHADING,AND THE LINE ART AND EYES.--Firepelt 23:38, December 7, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Is there going to be anymore comments?I have seen on a list of need charcat art that milkfur needed to be done as a depty.I need this one approved so if i gett 1 or 2 more,Ill be a warrior,--Firepelt 00:51, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Its only been a couple hours Firepelt anyway the shading looks a little messy.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:55, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be faded and the shading is blotchy and messy.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How's the shading now?I fixed it with the dodge tool,and added some where I had forgotten it.--Firepelt 02:00, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

He needs eye color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:14, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.--Firepelt 16:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Anything else?I tried to fix the shading.is it ok?--Firepelt 19:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

It's better but the shading on the body is a bit dark. Try making it the same color as the legs furthest from us and blur it some more.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:29, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart closer to his ear is blurred. Blur the shading more and add a pupil to the eye. (Get pencil tool brush 1 fill white pixlrs on the eye and leave 3 colored pixels. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:04, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading the best I could and I lightened the eye color,to dark of blue.I also I fixed the line art(sorry it was blurred!).Anything else?Firepelt 15:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

The shading still looks a little blotchy.Try blurring it some more-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:51, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

pixlr's blurring tool is like,horrible.I did the best I could with it,and it still looks alittle dark around the top of the front leg.Firepelt 22:31, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

I would darken the chest/back shading just a tiny, tiny bit if possible, and add some shading to the tail. Other than that, this looks great. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:35, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.I think i might be alittle dark,though.Do you think so?PIxlr's blurring tool dosen't seem right these days.Firepelt 23:40, December 10, 2009 (UTC)Firepelt

IDK but i thought he was a LONG hair cat but it doesn't matter (vicky changes things all the time!) thats whats fun! XD other than that perfect! --Echopaw 00:42, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you,echopaw.Hopefully,i'll get some more good comments,and it will be approved.1 more image on my way to a warrior.Firepelt 00:46, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Now the shading's a little dark. Try making it the same as the tail shading. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:00, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I am like,having a HORRIBLE time with pixlr's blurring tool.I did the best i could!Firepelt 22:31, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Brighten the eye colour a little. Maplefern 22:33, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink and shading still need blurring.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:22, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Firepelt 18:00, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

can you try to blur the shading alittle more. I know pixlr's blur tool isnt the best. also your siggy isnt working, its just writing.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 18:05, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I blurred the shading.Anything else? Firepelt 19:22, December 13, 2009 (UTC)Firepelt

Blur it some more on the back. And yes, Pixlr's blurring tools aren't the greatest. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!22:50, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Blur shading on the back-Check.Anything else? Firepelt 01:17, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Are the back legs supposed to be shaded? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!11:31, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I can't belive i forgot to shade the legs in the back! Firepelt 22:20, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?........ Firepelt 23:37, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I can see where you added it, but I personally can barely see it. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:33, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thx Mosswhisker!I darkened the shading,is everything ok now? Firepelt 22:51, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?Anything?AT ALL? Firepelt 00:12, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

One-eye (E) - For Approval
I don't really know which eye is 'clouded and sightless. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 03:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The cloudy eye is the one that we don't see (On this blank) So I'd color the eye amber. The shading could be blurred a little more, and I'd probably add some shading to the front paws too. And I can barely see the ear pink--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:27, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

how abought blurring the shading?? *Ivy jingle jingle!!*  07:17, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and darken the ear pink just a tiny, tiny bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:41, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think she is white, not grey. But if you intend to have a grey pelt, then it is good. Maplefern 00:28, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

No, One-eye is pale gray, not white--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry it took so long. Fixed the eye and blurred the shading. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 05:09, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Looks better, but the front paws still need shading--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 05:21, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 03:24, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

That's better, but make the eye color more amber. Right now it looks gold--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:32, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 03:37, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm, it still looks yellow to me. Amber is like a light reddish-orangeish-brownish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:52, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Make it almost orange with a tinge of yellow. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:55, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 01:17, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Better, but it still looks too yellow. Try adding a pale reddish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:44, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The eye looks fine to me. Just add some shading along the hindleg curve and this will be ready. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:33, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 02:46, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

blurr the shading and add some to certain places.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:55, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Be more specific Ivypool, which places do you mean?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:36, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the haunch (hind leg?). -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 02:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Chirp (Lo)-For Approval
Wow I haven't been on in a while! :) Here he is, Chirp! I just love that name...comments?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  11:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's pretty good. Maplefern 11:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a bit more pink in the ears -- Santastar Merry Catmas to all and all a good night! 12:12, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes really need blurred. --Bluestar1776 20:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did that help? P.S. This is my first Charart as a warrior! ^.^ -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:09, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good Mossy!! All I can see is maybe make the shading thicker, and what others osers said. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes just look to dark and "solid" to me... try running the dodge tool over them a bit, and blur them a bit more. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:43, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, thicken the shading (that's on the edge of the lineart, the shading inside the fur caused by the highlights is okay, but either brighten the highlights some more [only a little bit] or darken that other shading as well [only a little bit]), and blur the stripes a lot more. Glad you're back on. ;) These tabby stripes are awesome, by the way. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:37, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for 6 days... please work on it!! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 22:17, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry...CURSE YOU PREALGEBRA YOU ARE LITERALLY RUINING MY LIFE!!!!! Sorry, I have anger management issues. Will work on it soon.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded the burn tool is my hero :)-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:58, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

color the ear more,but AWSOME!!!my past mentor's past apprentice!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:08, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (CG) - For Approval

 * I sort of darkened the shading a bit too much, didn't I? I tried to do it by looking at the tutorials.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the shading does look a little dark and bumpy. Lighten and even it. Good job though! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:07, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:05, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

nice work Lighting :) there are some white bits of color on the tail lineart, and back lineart. otherwise I lile this. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:00, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! Just a few things 1)The space in between his legs and paws should be gray, not white (See Moss that grows by river, or Night of No Stars) The ear pink and nose pink look purple. Try making them more of a reddish color 3)I see two white pixels on the tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:06, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink so it won't look so purple.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:05, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. Do the mud streaks look a little awkward?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * you have one white pixel on the tail still. as for the mud I've never done it before so don't know :/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:42, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I think that the problem with the mud streaks is that on almost every Tribe cat they're all the same thickness. Normally, they would be narrower at the ends. But, as I said, almost every image has mud streaks like that, so... Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink and the nose pink still look very purple--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:15, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:52, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

You still have a white pixel on your tail. But the ear pink and nose are better. Maplefern 11:44, December 11, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 11:55, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose need to be more of a rosy colour. Also, the mud streaks look painted on. Look at the approved prey-hunter stripes as a good example; these haven't quite been perfected on the caveguards yet. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:36, December 15, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is WAY to bright. It should be more of a samlon color. Darken it a bit. -- ♥Shine star♥  02:21, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


 * I lightened it some time ago, but then Sandy told me to make it a rosy colour, so that's what I did.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:02, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you should go to red (not the pink) and select a pink from there. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!

I know Lightning. I said rosy but I didn't mean bright pink. Look at... Rippletail, Cloudtail, um, I can't think of any more right off the top of my head but look at the aproved images. Sorry for the confusion. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:40, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 05:42, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Run the burn tool over the ear pink and nose pink, it looks hot pink. But it's getting better!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:06, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:19, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Crowfur- For Approval
The highlight on his hind leg is really bugging me. I've played around with it a lot, but can't get it to look quite right. Any suggestions? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 22:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Good; but the color seems to cut off at the head and into a lighter area...? The scars could be blended more. And maybe darken the shading. Other than that it seems fine.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 22:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

This is good, but is the muzzle supposed to be white? Or is it tinged silver because of age? If it's tinged silver, I'd smudge it then blur it into his face, because it looks like he was born with that color muzzle. Btw, I LOVE how you do that missing fur! Did you do Graypool too? You're really good at that!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:40, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall, I did Graypool. Anyway, onto the image. The whiskers look like they have a couple missing pixels; fix that. Great job, otherwise:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 22:54, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry Flamingmom!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:55, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay, everyone makes mistakes:D --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 22:57, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Good job! Just blur the ear pink more. Oh, and did you reserve Crowfur on the Project page, 'cause I didn't see it. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:09, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Crowfur's page (Last I looked) said that he had "a silver muzzle." That may mean silver-tinged with age; and if that's so, is there a picture I could use for reference on how to make a silver-tinged muzzle? Oh, and sorry, Flamingomom! I actually modeled the fur off Graypool (Since it looked so good), but I didn't mean to copy you or anything! I'm real sorry about that. And, yes, I did reserve Crowfur. But if you want to do him, Rainwhisker, you have my full permission to, since my Crowfur isn't anything to look at. =P -- Angelstar Silver Bells 22:08, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

No, I was just wondering. Sorry! And your Crowfur looks really good. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:51, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay. =) Sorry, I didn't want to make you feel awkward or anything. -- Angelstar Silver Bells 00:55, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay, Honeyfur:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 01:13, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the hindleg curve and the chest. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:38, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 02:45, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I still can't see any on the chest or the bit above the tail where it meets the hindleg, if that makes any sense. Look at (I know it's my image and I don't normally give my own as examples but it's the first one I can think of that demonstrates what I mean)  Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 17:45, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry about that! By the chest, I thought that you meant the area in between his two legs. =P Is this what you mean? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 18:40, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Yep, that's what I meant - sorry for the confusion, I'm awful at explaining things at the moment. I see nothing else. Great job Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 17:17, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Snaketail-for approval


IDK about him...--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 01:03, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Yay! You're back, Minnow. :) Snaketail looks great, only thing is move the ear pink a bit more snugly into the ear, and make it darker and blend. -- Tinsel claw  01:34, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ya, sorry for leaving you guys, I have been addicted to Howrse for the past 30 days or so. Any better?--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 01:50, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Please?--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:46, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks very thin and isn't blurred very much - perhaps use a thicker brush on the fade-out style so it looks more of a natural transition and you won't have to blur as much considering your stripes. (if that makes any sense) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 20:54, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

I have three test this week and then off so please don't decline!--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 23:44, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Tadpole (K) -- For Approval!
Hey, Tadpole's back! Since he still didn't have an image and Rainpelt's verson left, I thought i have a go at him. Comments? Hopefully, no concerns!! :) -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Maybe add some highlights,the lineart is a little hard to see.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:04, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

well, i was actually gonna post it again as i have become active here again, but i wont go ohez noez a lot, so no worries from me. i cant see shading, so make it darker, and add a bit more green to the eyes. &#91;&#91;user:rainpelt&#124;rainpelt&#93;&#93; 01:31, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not seeing much eye color... -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:01, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Um, Rainpelt, his eyes are supposed to be amber. Not green.-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded -- Don't know if the changes showed up... -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

his eyes gotta be hazel from what i see. hazel is a greenish brown rainpelt 00:16, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright, make it more of a deep red, and blur it a lot.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:16, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a while. Please update soon, or it'll have to be declined--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Rainfur(W) - For Approval
I really wanted the Firestar's Quest cats done, so I decided to do Raintail. I don't really know how the darker flecks turned out. Comments? Hidden -jimgle ♪  19:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Great work on the spots I think they should give it immediate approval. But his name is Rainfur. WoodClan 20:10, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, his name is Rainfur. I changed the title for you, and make sure to rename the image. It's no biggie, I get names mixed up too;) Anyway, the image is great, but I think the spots should be less round and more irregular. (Oh, and your signature is misspelled; the "Jingle" part of it has an m instead of an n. Just letting you know:) ) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 20:23, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Make the spots more irregularly shaped and placed.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 20:43, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I reauploaded the new Rainfur, so sorry that I wrote Riantail. I did the flecks more irregular with the help of teh charart of brambleberry. And than you, I hadn't realized m,y siggy said Hidden-jiMgle. Hidden -jingle ♪  03:05, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

They still look too regular. Look at other spotted cats for help.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:46, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder and haunch highlights.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:43, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-fixed highlights and fixed the spots. Hidden -jingle ♪  21:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Tornear (E) For Approval
Well, I figured Tornear needed an elder picture. What do you think? I tried to make the stripes look as much like his warrior image as I could. How is it?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I love the neck and below, but the head looks bland, add a highlight and some more shading over there.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:45, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better Minnow?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:42, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I love Tornear! He's so cool! And I love the way your tabby stripes turned out! But... Can you blur the shading on the tail? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:41, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Snowfur (K) For Approval
-Well, I did the best I could. This is my first Character Art. Critisism wanted! (I also fixed it) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Tinselbreeze ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 19:39, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Couple of things to fix:
 * Don't color the fur pure white. Color it a very very very whiteish gray, so you can shade it.
 * Shade the image. If you use Pixlr or Gimp, click on the burn tool and run it over the areas that need shading (neck, top fo head, sides of body, under the legs, bottom of tail, etc.)
 * Fix the areas on the lineart that are blurred.
 * Add a highlight in the eye (white pixel). Only one in each eye. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 21:15, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Two things, first this needs to be a full size image, I fixed it for you. Second, she has needs to have gray tipped ears--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:31, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall, this is the fullsized image! See the early approved archives for Kitsu's reasoning on giant kitties XD This needs shading, the eyes need colour and the eartips need to be grey. Rainwhisker has it pretty much right - just follow her instructions and we'll go from there. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:41, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, adding on to what I'd said earlier, try using the sharpen tool (because the charart is pure white) and run it over the blurred areas. Or, you could fix the lineart by putting the blank over it (ask Bramble to help you). Oh and Sandy, how'd you know I was a girl? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 15:47, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

It seems like you uploaded the image over Snowkit's(OS) image. Rename it something like "Snowfur.Kit" and then reupload it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:50, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I've already done it. I renamed the file Snowfur(K), Moonshadow, so please upload on that file name when you update, please. -- Tinsel claw  22:23, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Pod (Lo) - For Approval
I know I should've posted Heavystep first, but I was having some trouble with the deformed leg. So, in my spare time, I made Pod. Comments/Criticism? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 21:09, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any highlights or shading.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:09, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Mousey. It looks kind of flat. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 00:01, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

It also says "muzzle tinged with silver". Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!19:56, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Mousetalon, highlights aren't neccesary, and I'll thicken the shading. Oh, and I forgot the gray muzzle. I'll do it now. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:31, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Uploaded Done. Any other problems? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 01:14, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Better. And I know, I just didn't knoiw if you wanted them or not. :)-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 03:15, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderpaw (A) - For Approval
Minnowclaw (my mentor) and I have been working on this for a little bit and she suggested to move it to here so I did. Comments? Suggestions? <font color="White" style="background:Magenta">Spottedhead The Shadows Are Rising! 23:19, December 12 2009 (UTC)

It is a good picture. The mentor-apprentice program is not on anymore, however. The lineart is blurred at the top of the front leg and the tip of the ear. Maplefern 00:29, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is touching the lineart, put a little gray between it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:12, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think that you over used the blur tool! On her back, the line art is blurred, and the ear too. Also, the eye is missing lines too. Fix that and you'll be good!!! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Speckletail - For Approval


The pale tabby queen who became an elder. My second cat! Please comment.--Night shine 05:47, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty dang good. The only things I can see would be to blur the tabby markings some more, darken the shading, and darken the ear pink. Onther than that, you did well. ; ) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:26, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Mumble said it all! LOL! Yeah, all I see is the stuff that Mumble already mentioned! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Hopefully I made it better ^^--Night shine 23:32, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Your picture automatically updates, so you don't need to re-post. Just reupload it. As for the image, personally I think the ear pink is too purple. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 23:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the ear pink color--Night shine 01:04, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I think Darkhallows had Speckletail reserved first--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:36, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Night shine, Darkhallows reserved it first and you aren't a member.

Shady's time limit ran out. The two weeks she had to do the image have been used up. I say again;there is no such thing as reserved. Night shine is perfectly able to do this image. Night is a member; check the list. For the image, Night, you need to add more tabby stripes on the chest and on the haunch and blur them in more. Also add some lengthen the shading and blur it into the pelt some more. -- Tinsel claw  22:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Isn't Speckletail a pale brown tabby she-cat?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:24, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is pale brown tabby. -- Tinsel claw  22:28, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know, it looks cream colored to me--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:43, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

she looks great to me!!good tabby markings and shading!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:10, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Brick (R) - For Approval
My first rogue (I think...) We have no gender for him(?) but I thought he(?) could still have an image seeing as he(?) has a full description otherwise. I did him(?) as male (hence me using 'him' and 'he') but figured that if he turns out to be a she then it will be simple enough to change the blank. Therefore, constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:45, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it makes sense that it would be a he (A she-cat named brick? xD). I don't see anything wrong with it. Great work. : ) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:24, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Feel free to ignore my comment: the eye color is a tad too bright. My computer makes many things too bright. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Urm, I don't think Brick has ever been mentioned as being ginger. Ignore me if I'm wrong. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:52, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Brick is a girl, it says it in her article, but ignore me if i'm wrong. Other than that, This looks great. -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 16:58, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

In the manga she's in, she has eye lashes. It makes her look pretty feminine. Although, she doesn't have a white patch on her back; she has a patch of fur missing, about right between her shoulder blades. It's too bad that everything in a manga is gray. But since we assumed that Ruby was gray, we can just assume that Brick is ginger. -- Tinsel claw  17:00, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Okay! I made her a girl (when I looked at her article it said unknown gender, I'm sure). I kept her ginger but changed the white patch to a section of missing fur. I lightened the eyes. Also, the upload log is playing up again so I changed the file name. Bramble, pretty please can you delete the old one? Brick.rogue.png (I feel bad asking you again but... sorry.) Any more comments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:24, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You can decide on whether this would make a difference or is important, but right now the furless patch looks like a pink patch on her back. You may choose to ignore this comment. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!01:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

hmm... any suggestions on how else I can do it? I see what you mean but I'm at a loss. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:20, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

How about sort of like the way you did Raggedstar's fur (you did do him, right?); put a little tuft of fur in front of it, but don't cover it completely? It'll make it look more convincing. -- Tinsel claw  22:38, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

That's a good idea Bramble, I didn't think of that. Okay, sorry it took a couple of days for me to get round to it, but here she is. Better? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:30, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:30, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Tangle (R) - For Approval
Tangle! ^^ I'm really proud of this one.--Night shine 04:28, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

This is good!! I would make the "ragged fur" a bit thinner, though, like Raggedstar's image. Also, darken the shading a tiny bit and darken ear pink. Fix those and this should be good. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:59, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

He's awesome! -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 17:51, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. I ca barely see it. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!17:55, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I edited it--Night shine 03:45, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

It looks much better. I would just blur the ragged fur a tiny, TINY bit. Not too blurry! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:56, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

I blurred the ragged fur a bit ^^ I hope you guys like it.--Night shine 01:25, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. I think this is ready. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:29, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Great Thanks!--Night shine 01:31, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Is it going to be approved?--Night shine 01:05, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

If you could blur the whole center of the body to make the highlights coalesce better, that'd be great. Other than that, the image is very well done. Tinsel claw  01:44, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Night shine 02:17, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

This looks awesome. Maybe darken the ear pink just a little bit more, and darken the color of the eyes just a tad bit, and this should be ready. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. I hope you like it!--Night shine 00:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) - For approval


I was surprised no one had made/reserved him when I did... anyway, he's been gathering dust in my files while I've waited for Snowfur to be approved (she just was!!), so here he is. I think I might need to darken the stripes. Comments? Concerns? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

His eyes are white, he may be blind, but Jayfeather does not have white eyes. Make them blue, please. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 01:46, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink appears purplish and the tabby stripes are too blurred. Feel free to ignore the marking part. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!02:03, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather already has a Mc picture by Dawnfeather-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes are way to blurred. And the highlights on his face look like cobwebs, as do the ones on his legs. Blurr them some more please. And yes, Bracken's right about Dawnfeather's picture. I don't really know if it's been approved, you'll probably have to ask Bramble or Sandy--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:38, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well, Jayfeather is still an apprentice on his page, and he hasn't been reserved by anyone. So I would think that ment I could do him. My computer is sick, so I need to get on my mom's to fix those things. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whilst Dawn's image was very good, it was never submitted for approval as far as I know and so has not been officially accepted by the project. This can stay up. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:04, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sandy. Anyway, I fixed the things you guys said. I had to save a new file because the changes weren't showing up. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink looks kinda, lopsided. Try straightening it more, and make it a little darker. Jayfeather is a tabby, but he hardly has any stripes. Try making them thicker, and adding more. Google a gray tabby for reference. But this is much better than before =)--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:13, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added more stripes and fixed ear pink. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Okay...can you add shading to the shoulderish part? Do you see where I mean? Just dodge tool it and then blur and it looks good!-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and less bright, make it more salmon-ish. And blur it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:53, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed ear pink and shoulder. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:49, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

the earpink needs to be blurred more and maybe darken his tabby stripes a little. I can't really see the ones on his body.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:42, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Lionheart (A) For Approval
Okay, I know Ashfoot's queen image used to be here, but I deleted it so I could start over. That big hightlight on her stomach was bothering me too much. So here's Lionheart as an apprentice! Okay, I tried to make his tabby stripes like his warrior image. How is he? Oh and by the way, have any of you noticed that Lionheart's eyes on his charart turned green? I could have sworn they used to be amber! Oh well, I'm not really complaining I just thought it was strange. Anyway, enough of my rambling. Comments?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:58, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

It is a good picture, but read Bramble's caption at the bottom of the page. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, I'm giving people a week, remember? The image looks great, Nightfall. His eyes are green; page 29 of Into the Wild. They may have been mentioned as golden once; I'm not sure, but for now this is fine. I don't see anything wrong right now. -- Tinsel claw  22:10, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! I read your notice, and whipped him right up in one night! Oh and yes, I know his eyes are green in the book, but I meant on his charart. Did somebody change it? I'm sure they used to be colored amber. Anyway, is it ready for approval yet?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:46, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome; just darken the ear pink a little bit and it should be ready. (I'm back~!) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

awsome!!

Oatwisker (E)- For approval


what do you think? rainpelt 11:54, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Rainpelt, Lowbranch doesn't even have a description. We need to do cats with descriptions--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:45, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

look at the image summary. names are in a way, descriptions. Branch for one. and eyes often come from the mother. rainpelt 22:01, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

This is true but you still can't be sure.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Rainpelt, but without a known description we can't just give her an assumed one. Unless you can find another cat with a known description for this image, consider it declined. -- Tinsel claw  22:31, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

made it into an elder using same colors. rainpelt 00:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is very bumpy and uneven, please even it out. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 00:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED fixed that. rainpelt 00:37, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The glare in his eye is blue, it needs to be white--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:40, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOAGED added glare and ear pink. rainpelt 00:43, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The glare has to be white Rain, right now it's gray--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:00, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

it is. rainpelt 01:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

For future reference, the "glare" is the highlight (that's what we call it) and it is white, Nightfall. Rain (is it ok if I call you that?), just add shading on the chest, in between the legs, and under the tail. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 01:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. fixing other stuff as some guy in yougomaglaslafia speaks :p rainpelt 01:39, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry. I see that now. When you look at my computer screen from a certain angle, it makes everything darker, and it looked gray then.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:48, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - For approval


Ok, so I know he doesn't have mudsteaks, but some other cave guards don't either so I didn't think it was nessicary. I know this is over the limit of 35, but two are in the 24 hour stage and 1 has been declined, so I figured I should put it up already. As for Stormfur, he should have stayed in ThunderClan. ;) Comments? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 00:17, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good Blue. (Mind if I call you that?) I think the shading needs to be blurred a little more though. And the ear and nose pink need to be a little darker, see Graystripe's image for reference Graystripe. And as for mudstreaks, you'll have to ask Bramble, Sandy, or one of the senior warriors about that, cuz I'm not excatly sure whether the cave guards need them or not--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:09, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I think they do, 'cause in Moonrise, there's a part where it says, "...mud-covered cave-guards." So, I think it should have mud streaks. As for the image, color the space in between the forelegs, and darken the shading. Good job! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 01:20, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - added mud streaks, fix ear pink and nose and filled in leg space. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:57, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the mud streaks a little- they look unnatural. -- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 02:32, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Current Ranks
Just to make it perfectly clear so we don't have any misunderstanding, all the members have one week to get all the non-current rank images out of their systems. Anything after December 22 will be declined if it is not a current image. Please note that cats that have an image but have moved up or down in rank are still eligible. However, there will be no more Whitestorm as a kit or Firestar as an apprentice. -- Tinsel claw  03:38, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval


Heheh, she's so nice. :-) One of the images is about to be deleted, so it wont be 36 for long. Comments? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:29, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Agreed. Poor Minty! Anyway, onto the image, I think you need to blur the highlights a bit more, and maybe lighten the ear pink. But, otherwise, she looks awesome, Mumble! -- Angelstar Silver Bells 19:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! I'll get onto that ASAP. ;-) -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 19:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I think Nightfall101 had her already! i swear! but this is good Mumble!--Echopaw 21:15, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm... I know it says she's a queen on her page, but she isn't really. If she needed an image, she would be a loner. She had her kits as a loner, and the term queen is only used in Clans, just as kit-mother is used in the Tribe. Other loner/rogue she-cats who had kits aren't classified as queens, such as Sasha. It would be different if this was like Daisy, who had her kits and then joined a Clan, but Minty never joined or will join a Clan. So I don't think she should have a queen image, but a loner image instead. Please correct me if I'm wrong. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:41, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I see where you're coming from Bluestar but the definition of queen is any she-cat expecting or nursing kits. As for the image it's really good but I agree with Angelstar.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome Mumble! But I do agree with Bluestar. I think she should have a loner blank rather than a queen blank. Oh and Echo, yes, I did have her reserved for a while, but I had never done a loner before, and when I tried doing Minty, it didn't turn out so good. So, I decided to let someone else do her--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I discussed my view on this with Bluestar; you can see on her talk page. The bottom line is that this is the correct blank; she-cat nursing kits or pregnant is a queen, thus she be used with a queen blank. Tinsel claw  22:22, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

When I checked nobody had reserved her...? I'm gonna take a look at the discussion, and decide what to do about the blank, but I think I might stick with the queen; A queen is really just a pregnant or nursing she-cat. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:44, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Blurred her more, kept the blank the same. Anything else? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of dark, but that's just my opinion. Ignore me if you think the color is good. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 16:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. I'll lighten it up a tad, as well as the shading. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 16:25, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Dapplepelt- For Approval
Well some images are in the 24 hour stage so I thought putting this up would be ok. Comments on my first tortiseshell?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:38, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

i see nothing wrong.... :D-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  08:00, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

It might just be my computer screen, but it looks as if the highlights could be blurred a lot more. Also, the way her tortoiseshell patches are blurred looks kinda strange. Especially the ones in the middle. And the ones along the lineart could use some more blurring --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:49, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well kinda. I didnt really like the first one so I made a new one and decided to see which one you guys like best.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:14, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I liked the color and texture of the ginger on the second one, but the shapes were a bit square.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:18, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I decided that I liked this one better. I added earpink and tried to fix the squareness of the patches. Comments?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 15:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Redstar - For Approval
Yes, I know it's the 39th image on the page, but it won't be the 38th for long. Anyway, I added a couple tabby stripes here and there because I felt like coloring a ginger cat the natural way:) Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 20:42, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is great! But the highlights are... a little bright, either that or the pelt is too dark, also, i can't see the shading very well. -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 20:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is much too dark, and you need to make a bit of distinction between the shading and the main pelt color and highlights. Right now it just looks like he's colored this way, with no shading. -- Tinsel claw  22:39, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the shading (I hope) and highlights. Better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 01:14, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Husker (Lo) For Approval
I think this is my best image ever! -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Uh, some spots seem to have not shading, like the belly.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Mosspath is right. His belly needs shading, not his back. And if you want highlights, use the dodge tool and mark the shoulder and haunch. Blur too.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 03:19, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the yellow fur on his head looks, weird. I don't own any of the Graystripe manga books, but I've read them in Barnes and Noble. I saw Huskar's picture, and the hay colored fur on his head isn't behind his ears. I know this might be difficult to do, but I would suggest drawing a little tuft of fur on his head, and color it in ginger. And delete the one behind the ears--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:36, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The mangas are gray. Does it ever even say anywhere that the tuft of fur on his head is hay-colored? If it were me, it would make it a patch of either light or darker gray. -- Tinsel claw  22:23, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

It does say on his page that he has hay colored fur on his head. -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 23:10, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

An official confirmation. Husker's article is not official. It is very likely that some person just thought hay-colored fur, and put it in. Many people put in false descriptions. Unless you find somewhere a colored official picture of Husker, or a confirmation from Victoria Holmes, then turn the head tuft dark or light gray. Tinsel claw  01:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:20, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Right now the shading is too dark and needs to be blurred more as well as the highlights.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded, how's this? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 13:02, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Still, the highlights need to be blurred more. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 14:23, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? If it still is not blurred enough, please show me how much to blur it, because pixlr.com won't let me blur them more. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 14:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Fish Leap - For Approval


Yes, this is an ancient cat. I decided that since the ancients eventually become the Tribe, the cats in training to be sharpclaws would generally be classified as to-bes. They're never mentioned as anything but cats in training to be sharpclaws, anyway. Comments? -- Tinsel claw  23:04, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Your words confuzzled me, Bramble...but THI IMAGE IS STUNNING!!! XD-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:35, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

This is great Bramble. I was just wondering, are these the cats that would be softpaws or are they something different?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:01, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Darken it to make it a little browner and I think your right, why make a new blank for a cat who we don't even now who they are classified as.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 18:12, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Olivenose (W)- For Approval
Did I exceed the image limit?I was too lazy to check. Well, it's my first tortoiseshell- cower in fear! Anyways, comments?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:56, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good Mouse! But it doesn't look very much like her apprentice picture. Her apprentice picture is tortoiseshell with a white muzzle and chest. See this-Olivepaw. Your's doesn't look like that. It's so awsome though!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:56, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I agree. Plus, theres no earpink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 19:40, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Hawkey's right, there's no ear pink. But I would hate for this to go to waste, is there another character you could re-submit this as?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:45, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

This succeeds the page limit; from the comments I see, this needs some work, and so this should be taken off the page. For now.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:06, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, take it off. But remember, I did the tail and muzzle right- the Olivepaw image is another side of her body, not the same one. And I will add ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 00:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

No need the take this day now. It is within 35 images and there are other images that have exceeded the limit. Moustalon, this is very good. Just fix the things said up there and this should be good. :)--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 18:00, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think that's better. Do you guys think I should redo her?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:01, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Oh I think it's beautiful Mouse! But you still need to add ear pink--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:04, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I made another image. Which one do you like better?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:29, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I think the second one looks more like her apprentice picture.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:31, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 03:25, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Oh Mouse, this is beautiful! But, maybe connect the black on her front leg with the ginger on her pelt instead of leaving a white space in between it--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:34, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

No, look at her apprentice pixel.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:02, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I see what you mean. But maybe try and smudge into the white more? It looks unnatural--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:07, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) for Approval
well here she is!--Echopaw 21:03, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw, please put this as a full size image; it is hard to see. Also, this has too many images on it now. When some get approved, you may put this back up. -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:09, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I really don't know how to do that this is meh first charrie!--Echopaw 22:02, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

On the project page click on the image before saving it. This isnt bad for your first charart either.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:05, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing it again. Also, approval is spelled wrong. I fixed the title for you. Also sign with the four tildes ~ like that but four and nothing else. :) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:09, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED okay here she is!

Okay, just a quick q...what program do you use? I don't see any shading/highlights, and if it's Paint, there are no tools to make shading/highlights.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Pixlr.comEchopaw 22:34, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I thought I had Half Moon Reserved?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 00:37, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Ohh i didn't see:'C- Echopaw 01:35, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw had Half Moon on her list first, actually. You need to blur the shading, but other than that the image is well done. Tinsel claw  01:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED here she is i blured the shadings!:) --&#91;&#91;User:Echopaw&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:green; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;&quot;&gt;:D Santapaw ♥&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&#91;&#91;User talk:Echopaw &#124;&lt;sup&gt;&lt;span style=&quot;color:yellow&quot;&gt;&#39;Have a great Christmas!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/sup&gt;&#93;&#93; 03:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

good!!,but you need a siggie.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:14, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Me and my stupid siggy >:D --Echopaw 12:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Foxleap (W)-For Approval


I have to say, THANK YOU ICESTORM!!! :D I like this picture WAYYYY better than my Ryewhisker!!! Well, here is Foxleap!-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:17, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Well, this is good Moss, but two things. 1)The image has to be full size. 2) The coloring is wrong, Foxleap is red brown tabby. Right now it's just brown tabby. Look at his apprentice picture for help-Foxleap--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

It is the right size Nightfall... the colourig could be more reddish though. Apart from that, this is really very good. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:09, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) - For Approval
My first tabby. I did the best I could. I really want this approved by Christmas. Please! Comments before Christmas? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:28, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe more shading and some more stripes.-- Darkhallows 12:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink more, add more shading and blend, darken the tabby sttipes, and add more tabby stripes. Also, make them a little more wavy and not strait y's.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 17:55, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Wait I am too lazy to put the Reuploaded sign up. Wait I just did! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks messy. Blur it and add highlights to the head and tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Ice- For Approval
I know I'm exceeding the image limit, but I've been waiting a couple of days now for it to go down, and it hasn't. But since one image is in the "24-Hour-Stage" I thought it would be okay for me to post. Constructments? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 17:07, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, just add some shading on the back on the rear leg and make the claws and teeth go in different directions and not all in one. It just makes it look a little better, if you don't want to do it, then it's fine.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 17:53, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

It's no problem. =) I love doing Charart, so you can tell me to do whatever you want me to do to the image, and I won't mind. ;) -- Angelstar Silver Bells 18:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading? Also do what Minnow says and I think this is ready. :) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Join
Could I join the Charart?--Echoheart 22:21, December 18, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

Yes, you may. I'll add you right in on the member list. Welcome to the Project, Echoheart. -- Tinsel claw  02:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! May StarClan light your path too!--Echoheart 15:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

Speckle (Lo) - For Approval
I know, I've gone way past the image number, but I got my laptop back and I really wanted to have an image up, so here we go. I'll put Splash back up once the number of images on the page clears a bit. I'm not sure how this image turned out...comments and suggestions? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:27, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe darken the ear pink. But that's all I see right now. Does anyone else see anything? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Would she be classified as a queen because she is a she-cat nursing kits? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:34, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know if this is really flecked. They look more patchish to me, but I really like the image.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:35, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Aww, I completely forgot that she was nursing kits. Is there another cat this image could work for? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:45, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (R)- For Approval
Well, I know this is past the image limit, but I will be busy and might not be able to post, so here. Comments?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:05, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Can I Join??
hi i'm *Ivypool*'s sister. can i join??-- Eagle  glide  09:42, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sure Bramble will let you. She's so nice and awesome. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 14:14, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

hi
hello i wish become an apprrentice so could you put me on the list iceyfang