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Dawncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
Boom. All colors colorpicked from the elder that Jayie has for approval. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:06, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on her belly a bit (I know it's artist's choice but it seems a little too dark), and I don't think her stripes really match the other images, but that might just be me 20:04, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I can't do anything with the stripes. I copied from the elder best I could. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:26, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

It could just be me, but the base coat looks a little light. 10:21 PM, Tue Jul 29, 2014

I think it's because of the highlights. Maybe dull them some? Wow... *o* 22:26 Tue Jul 29

the stripes don't match, possible add more. 01:07, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too thin, and there should be striping on the head. I think the highlighting might be a little too bright as well compared to the other Dawncloud images, but that might be up to artist preference, not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:10, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled the highlights, thickened the stripes, and lightened the face shading so you could see the face stripes. I matched the stripes the best I could, and spent about two hours on them. I even pasted the Elder on another layer to use as reference. Queens' bellies are stretched, so so is the pattern, to be fair. (And Duck, adding more stripes probably won't make it match more, because she never had more stripes then this in the first place) Pls don't kill me  Shinxy  Blitz  and  Melody  09:08, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Does she have texture, or is that just the way you've done the shading? 11:35, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

It's shading. I smudged rather then blurred. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:05, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, if you look at her StarClanner, she does have more stripes than this facing this way, adding more, would make it match more. 17:47, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. OK, Shinx confirmed for derp. Added some more stripes, although I don't have room for any more. If someone complains, I'll just redo them. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:37, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit its desaturating her colors. 22:45 Wed Jul 30 2014

There's waste under the belly and on the front leg farthest to us. Brick  09:33, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:58, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 19:11, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a teeny bit. This is lovely. *.*

Re-uploaded Thank you! Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

make the stripes more pixel-y 18:31, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

I'm afraid I can't, I tried. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:53, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

You can't unblur them?

Nope. I used the sharpen tool, and it won't work any more. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  19:17, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

try filters>enhance>sharpen, because the stripes on the other images look more pixel-y and less blurred than this image and it's causing this image not to match as well as the others. 14:00, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  17:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Sunfish (Q) - For Approval
fish fish fish fish fish >(,·) 17:24, July 30, 2014 (UTC)\

dull the earpink a bit? fish fish fishy fish fish 6:10 PM, Wed Jul 30, 2014

>)))),·) 19:19, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The leg shading is a bit flat... <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:38, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

><((("> 23:06, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out her leg and chest shading, and define the light on her legs 13:25, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

<º)))>< 21:08, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the depth in the belly shading. Teldy x fish

Still working? 14:04, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

<')))>< #bandcamp   16:23, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ Withdrawn
let's see if I can get this approved by august 7th (holiday c:)! Comments? Changes are here 23:38, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reups changes 13:07, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading looks blotchy on some areas of the belly and hind leg that's lifted. <span style="">23:32 Sun Aug 3

Reups 00:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit?

Reups change I also darkened it a bit 21:41, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 14:05, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think that facial shading should be smoothed out a bit more. She also needs a paler muzzle and I don't see that on here.

Withdrawn, since I'm in Spain and don't have access to a computer. If this is still available when I'm back, I'll carry on with it. 17:13, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Wind (Q) ~ For Approval
ehhh, comments? 02:24, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Very nice shading on the face. :) Maybe have a bit more shadow on the >>>> side of her belly, and have some highlight on her chest. This looks really good. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:40, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

The chest wouldn't have any light hitting it at this position, so I think it's fine, as well as the belly, since it's trying to make the belly look round and all o3o 17:05, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

thin out the cheekbone shadow, unless she has some really really defined cheekbones it wouldn't be that big 19:13, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

She could have some really defined ones or not - why should we assume? I think it's fine because of said reason. (ahh i hope this doesn't come off as laziness because it's not) 19:15, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think it would hurt to do what Duck suggested. I saw it at first and thought it was unblurred/unsmudged shading. And it kinda is coming off as laziness, dear. =P

re-up 20:50, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

make the earpink more visible in -> ear please? Nice job. <span style="">12:17 AM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

Smooth out the main body shading just a bit more.

re-up 23:39, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (Ki) - CBA
Pulled all colors and opacities from the apprentice. comments? 17:10, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws. He's cute! <span style="">21:20 Sun Aug 3

Re-uploaded Thanks~ c: 21:57, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? I'm having a hard time seeing it. cuteeeee!! <span style="">12:15 AM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

The shading on the tail suggest the light is coming from a different way than the body shading. On the body the light comes from the left but on the tail the light comes from the right. Brick  19:17, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading just a little bit.

re-uploaded however, I didn't change my lightsource because I've used this for years on all of my kits 18:34, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 14:05, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Thorn (Alt. Ro 2) ~ CBA
She was described with Dew's description and gender, and according the the characters needing art page, that warrants an alt? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  11:55, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

I believe the file should be named Thorn.rogue.alt2.png. Also, some of the bits of fur sticking up going along the spine, the lines on them look a little bit thinner than they should, could you just add a few pixels to them so they match the rest of the lines? Brick 14:35, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Would you like Dew's lineart? You may use it if you wish. <span style="">17:24 Mon Aug 4

Yes please, Hawkie. ^_^ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  19:17, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Here you go! <span style="">20:16 Mon Aug 4

TY, I'll re-upload ASAP. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  20:57, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  00:19, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

The file's still named incorrectly, it should be Thorn.rogue.alt2.png. Brick  11:26, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

I know that, however I have no ability to change it. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  18:00, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah you can, just re-upload it to File:Thorn.rouge.alt2.png <span style="">6:11 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

That'd leave this file just floating around, being SPAM. I'd rather wait and ask someone to please rename it? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  18:23, August 6, 2014 (UTC)


 * you'd just mark the file for deletion. But anyway works I suppose... <span style="">6:25 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

Thank you for not wanting to create more images for deletion, Shinx. I've renamed the file for you. =)

Thank you! <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit.

I'm not sure if it was intentional, but there appears to be a patch of... Blue on the face/neck. Brick  22:53, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

It's the shading tint, I assume? <span style="">23:16 Wed Aug 6

Re-upped It's a tint, I tried toning it down some. And I smudge my shading, not blur it, but I smudged it a bit more. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  00:07, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

I apologize for nagging, but can I please have some comments on this (And maybe Dawncloud)? I want to get this approved before Bramblestar's Storm is released, and the time it takes for my images to get approved, that's gonna be hard anyway. Sorry for nagging V_V <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:48, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 14:06, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Dew (Alt Ro) - CBA
Figured I'd try a rogue blank. Dew was described with Thorn's description at one point, so that warranted an alt. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:29, August 5, 2014 (UTC)

If I remember correctly, Dew was also described as female here, so this should be the female blank. Also, maybe define the tail shading a bit? I wish I was this good. 16:32, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changed the blank, lightened the eyes a bit, defined the tail shading, and tweaked the ear shading. And thanks. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:27, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Here's the changes in case they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140807C/ezimba13931897993700.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:28, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading just a bit?

Does this work? Here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140807C/ezimba13931841642100.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:42, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 14:06, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Star) - For Approval
Rumble rumble Brick  12:57, August 5, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? 13:53, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2hrel4m.png, rumble rumble Brick  19:15, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the highlights, and define the shading a bit more.

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/3305kbr.png Rumble rumble rumble Brick  18:44, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

what color are you using for the shading? 13:58, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

I use pure black for the shading and pure white for the highlights. I just lower the opacity a lot. Brick  14:48, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Duskfur (Q) - For Approval
Changes are here.

define the belly, tail, and chest shading a tick? <span style="">11:27 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading since I didn't like the first one and shading this isn't as easy as it looks.

Try making the stripes curve some more. 01:41, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

They don't curve at all on the warrior. If I made them curve, I think it would divert from the original pattern. Pregnant or not, I don't want to teeter too far away from the pattern Twee made, and they don't curve very much on the original queen image or warrior (I was trying to match the warrior and queen both tbh), so unless someone else agrees, I'd really rather not change it.

Yes, but just because of the perspective, I think they should bend like (((( a bit, because if she's coming towards you the stripes would bend that way, as would the belly. It's less about the pregnancy and more about the perspective. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:48, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Perspective over pattern. Makes sense. Re-uploaded. Changes.

Wrenflight (Q) ~ For Approval
Hawky thinks she did a good job. <span style="">23:26 Thu Aug 7

Blur the tail shading a tad. Brick thinks Hawky did a good job. Brick  13:44, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

I smudged the shading so I'd rather not. Thank you, though. <span style="">18:24 Sat Aug 9

possibly use a soft-edged brush and just smudge the tail shading slightly, it does look quite hard-edged. 13:57, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Red (SD) (Ki) ~ For Approval
02:37, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink. I want this plz Imma steal it from you.

Bumble (Lo) ~ For Approval
Um, did she still have a collar when she became loner? I didn't read the book.

She didn't have one that I can recall, but since I'm not sure, I think you should probably put one on her just in case.

Re-up ~ I put a collar on her with the colors of her kittypet version. Click for changes.

Frost (StarClan) - For Evaluation
Did I do a good job? Tigerbird-The-Great 16:59, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, needs a texture, and the image isn't the right size. For the texture, I recommend asking David, the artist of Frost's rogue image, how he made his.

On Frost's page, It says he's thick furred. Tigerbird-The-Great 17:11, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thick fur does not mean long-haired. I have thicker hair, but it wasn't always as long as it is. I used to have it fairly shorter when I was younger, and it was pretty dang thick. The thickness refers to the density of the fur, not the length. Plus, you have an an image to match, and David uses the short-furred blank.

Define and darken the shading a tick, and blur the earpink. Very nice job on this. If it helps, for thick furred cats, to make the shading look less flat, I do two layers of dark blue shading, instead of black. <span style="">5:43 PM, Sat Aug 9, 2014

Did you shrink the lineart at all? It looks much smaller than it should and I don't think it's just displaying as a thumbnail Brick   09:58, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve this before posting it. If you're not gonna reserve it, I'll just decline it again. =P I told you this when you posted it before, and in chat, Tiger.

Hazelwing (Q) ~ For Approval
I tried. This doesn't match at all, does it? <span style="">19:36 Sat Aug 9

Changes. <span style="">19:37 Sat Aug 9

Nice work! Maybe try and shorten the strokes of the texture and blur it a touch. Also, maybe add one more layer of defined shading on the face? 19:50, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. c: <span style="">23:05 Sat Aug 9

Uh, her StarClan image doesn't have texture at all. Those are meant to be stripes. They're not really blurred at all on her StarClan image....This one actually matched a little better than the subsequent upload.

Would you like me to revert? However, I can't do much with the .xcf because I upload over the files and discard the old ones. If I'm missing something about images and GIMP please tell me <span style="">18:29 Sun Aug 10

Tallpoppy (Q) - For Approval
I'm not entirely sure I got the pattern to match right. Suggestions? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:23, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Oh yeah, and here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140810C/ezimba13931859337500.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Echomist (Q) - For Approval
05:01, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Can you upload the changes somewhere? I can't see them.

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba18240393863200.png 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

The pattern fades into the shading, and I think the smudged shading should be thinner? This appears really thick in certain places, like the tail, and it throws it off..

Lilystem (Q) - For Approval
Oh lawdy ;-; Brick  10:29, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

http://i61.tinypic.com/33ttehg.png, the wiki is having one of those "I won't update images" days. Brick 10:30, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes, and smudge them. 12:53, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

she looks a bit cross-eyes 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2lar3m8.png, I didn't change the eyes because she doesn't look that cross eyed, more like she's looking at where she's walking. If someone else agrees that she looks derpy eyed I'll change it thought. Brick 14:44, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Duck; she does look a bit cross-eyed.

Re-ups,''' http://i57.tinypic.com/34t5nx3.png     and i must admit on second looking the old eyes did make her look overly interested in whatever she was staring at. Maybe she had just read that Rainflower was actually Stormkit and Oakkit's mother? '''

Try smudging the stripes the way of the belly, like on the warrior image. 17:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Shadepelt (Star) ~ For Evaluation


My first character SziriXxX (talk) 17:25, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. Wonderful job on her! <span style="">5:39 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Define the eye depth a tad and expand the earpink a bit. Brick  18:21, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (Lo) - For Approval
Okay, so I took the colors from the deputy, and I tried to match the stripes, but he has no images at this angle so I matched the pattern a bit on the face, legs, neck/chest area, and tail and the rest I improvised. <span style="">5:35 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Lighten the stripes to match the other images Brick   18:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)