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=Tweaking=

Tornear (Alt W) ~ Tweaked
OA is me, tweaked to have torn ear. Question: Does he need stripes since brown is just a shortened description? 00:55, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

i dont think so honestly i mean if its just calling him brown, hows it a shortened description? its just saying hes brown and not implying stripes. but anyway, do you think you could possibly make the tear more noticable or something? since hes quite clearly named after it for whatever reason. (you tell me erins..) 05:30, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

This is just a suggestion, but maybe it shouldn't just be a little V cut into the ear. Maybe a good, big chunk of the ear should have been torn out, leaving very little ear left? That would definitely be big enough for a cat to be named after. Cats' ears get torn all the time in the books, but they don't usually get torn so badly that they barely leave any ear left. Jayie Unwritten words~ 08:53, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lionblaze (K) - Tweak
Look at that little scruffy neck. ^^ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:21, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the fluff fluffier and a bit more obvious? 05:28, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Tornear (E) - Tweak
I still say his ear should look like a huge chunk got torn out of it, not just a little V. But here I matched the other ones posted so far, unless the others get tweaked, then I'll tweak accordingly. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:23, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Alder (Ki) - Redone
OA is me and I redid to make it a bit more towards her canonical description.

Longtail (Alt W 2) ~ Tweaked
OAs be Wildheart, Ferk, and Snowman, tweaked for a longer tail. 18:56, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Ferk's tweak never passed, so she wasn't an OA. =P Shorten the tail just a pixel or two- Kate said it wasn't obnoxiously long.