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Bluestar (W) - Redone
So, I re-did the image, and I am sorry, but I do not know who made the image before. I wasn't sure if I should add the scar, so please tell me if I should. εСћб ђэάѓτ  11:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

i think should not cause was it seen on her leader or older warrior image? otherwise this is really good apart from the shading under the neck that i think is supposed to be there but i dont know  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 12:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading, ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I darkened the shading and blurred the highlights. εСћб ђэάѓτ  16:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but perhaps make the ear pink a bit bigger? insane brick'd 16:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto insane. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made ear pink bigger. How's it now? εСћб ђэάѓτ  17:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading needs serious blurring. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   18:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Is it okay? εСћб ђэάѓτ  18:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. The blue is a little dark--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit, she looks very dark compared to her other images Night  Fall 18:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

She's supposed to have a silver tinged muzzle and tail tip.XxdovesongXX 07:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

She only had the silver muzzle and tipped tail because she was getting old. I don't think it's needed on her warrior image, because she is still young--  Night s h i n e    ~  07:21, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made her lighter. εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading the back leg. ♥Ice shine★  15:59, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It could still be lightened more. I think the colour should be similar to her kit and apprentice images--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:30, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit too bright, try desaturating it some Night  Fall 17:10, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad, and make the muzzle silver. Dawny  19:40, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add the silver tipped tail? Mõŏń    ۞   03:59, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was after she got old Night  Fall 06:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

blur haunch shading. ♥Ice shine★  14:52, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink just doesn't seem right for this colour pelt. Perhaps take it from another blue-ish cat with a more natural colour. Maybe Mistystar? -- Sandy star 19:56, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I changed the earpink to look more like Mistystar's, I blurred as much as I could, and I desaturated it. I didn't add the silver tipped muzzle and tail because that was when she got older. εСћб ђэάѓτ  12:32, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

She's should be more of a gray color. Darkhallows... Mew? 18:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree with Shady; she needs to match the colour of her other images. Using the desaturate tool should do the trick and then redo the ear pink and eye colour. -- Sandy star 08:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Darken the shading ♥Ice  storm★  12:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree with Darhollows. Rubyblaze 19:01, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree as well, she looks very, very blue. It doesn't match her other images, really.XxdovesongXX 21:38, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is too blue, and very bad


 * Fluffybunnies, two things. 1] Please remember to sign with ~ . 2]'very bad' is not a helpful or constructive comment. If you think it is very bad then you need to give some help for the improvement of the image.
 * Echoheart, this image is not very bad at all, just follow the advice everyone has given. -- Sandy star 22:27, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy, Echo; I think your shading technique is absolutely beautiful Night  Fall 23:50, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Fluffybunnies, this this art is not bad, and believe it or not, some cats actually are blue like this. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 09:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Just do what is listed above and this will look great. I love your shading! --Willo wwh isp 16:11, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks to all of the people who said great things about my art :) Anyway, I tried to make it more gray, but I don't think it worked. Comments? εСћб  ђэάѓτ  17:29, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to desaturate it some more. Other then that it's lovely. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:26, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, maybe you should add a scar on her shoulder too. Or should that only be on her leader image? Night Fall 05:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

She seems a bit purple to me, I think you should add a silver tint to it. Just my opinion though. :] Frostheart  ♥  20:16, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think she seems very blue. But if that's what everyone is looking for, then I see nothing wrong with the colour of her pelt. But I do agree with the silver tint tip. Also, could I recommened a little shading on her head? Out of my way, Kittypet! I'm not in the mood! 20:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

No silver, I think just desaturating it would do the trick. =) W    a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   21:16, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to be gone for at least five days for vacation, so please don't decline if it's possible. εСћб ђэάѓτ  14:52, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Try using the sponge tool to desaturate it. If it makes it MORE saturated, then change it's settings to make sure it does saturate it. This is good, though! Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 16:12, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Gah, this sucks. Comments and/or critique?--Shaf Girl  23:21, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:23, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and darken the shading-- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:25, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear fathest from us a bit.  Dawny  23:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken it, and blur it. Add shading to the head. ♥Ice shine★  00:01, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ah noes... the <3 colour is being lost by the removal of the shading. Definitely darken it and thicken it. The original shading was the right colour, just needed extending to other areas. -- Sandy star 08:38, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I completely redid it.--Shaf Girl  17:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   19:36, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the muzzle and tail. ♥Ice storm★  12:11, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little.  Dawny  05:55, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl  23:06, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. --Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp 16:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading some more. Night Fall 05:23, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more shading on the nearest ear, perhaps? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">Out of my way, Kittypet! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">I'm not in the mood! 14:12, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  17:44, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too noticeable. Frostheart ♥  20:17, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shading can be a handful you might need to make it thinner but not to thin just enough to make it more natural but dont put the whole circle on there it will look dark maybe set the exposure to at least 47 or 48 so it is not as dark then blur itTry that  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 00:58, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

And make sure that the hardness of the brush is around 50 or lower, it gives it a more natural look. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   14:02, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Q) - Redone
Bleh. I doooooon't like this image. Good news: My tap number in a national comettion got third overall in the Pre-Teen Group :) Influx Lennon -   Ringo's Wife  23:22, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading a bit. Make it a bit more sandy coloured, it looks a bit pink right now-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  02:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more stripes-- ♥Ice storm★  12:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I I add anymore stripes, it won't look like Sandstorm anymore. I (think) I added the amount she has on her warrior image. Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  13:17, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more reddish.  Dawny  21:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

She's too dark. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Maybe lighten her a bit? -- Sky Dawn Light... 23:16, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

define the ear pink more. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;backround:lime;border:1px solid -moz-border-radius: 1em; color:purple;">MOSSLEAP:)

Define the stripes on her tail and forearms more.  Dawny  05:58, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

It may be just my screen, but she looks kinda pinkish to me. -- Sky Dawn Light... 20:15, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe it's your screen. She looks beautiful to me. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  10:25, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''This fails.... Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  12:07, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try blurring the stripes and it does not fail :P  Fuzz  Leader of loners 16:33, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes need to be evenly blurred, they are too blurred in some places. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   21:09, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Mousetalon.Rubyblaze 01:42, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandy. I fixed up the shading and added some highlights. I also made the white chest smaller-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:30, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:32, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:46, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make the ear pink smaller. ♥Ice storm★  19:55, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I needs to be blurred. And the ear pink is .... to purple.21:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC) Darkhallows... Mew?

The earpink doesn't look purple to me. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  21:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blure the highlights more. - <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:red; Background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp   22:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened shading a bit, fixed highlights, and fixed ear pink a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:08, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

darken the highlights some. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:10, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need some blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   00:19, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:01, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur white transition. ♥Ice storm★  02:16, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:54, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the highlights are really bothering me. They're too bright and concentrated, and they don't look real, no offense. Make them more like Sloefur's or similar to that, if you can. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:41, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are blotchy-looking Tawny SMEASH 22:28, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I switched to my other computer to see if this would look different than on my laptop, and it did. I tried fixing up the highlights more-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:41, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions Night  Fall 00:44, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Since Nightshine is away at camp, I could take this over, unless anyone else is willing. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   03:15, July 17, 2010 (UTC)


 * You can if you want to although I don't doing it if you don't. The shading/highlights need blending. -- Sandy star 14:04, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded. I re-did the whole thing, and just tweaked it, which one do you like better? W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:44, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * The right one the highlights are less concentrated  Fuzz  Leader of loners 16:35, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right, but blur the highlights and ear pink on it.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 01:21, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuloaded. '''Okay, goin' with the right one! Anything else? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   15:49, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 16:11, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Omg nevermind Nightfall already said Blur white transition Sorry  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 14:45, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   14:44, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (W) - Tweaked
It needed a furry texture added, so I did my best. Original artist is the amazing Echomist. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:29, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good Mouseh but by furry texture it meant that smudgey effect on the stripes. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:45, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

*face palm* I fail. Lemme see what I can do. -- W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:51, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I tried and tried but no matter what it would always mess up. Any suggestions? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   21:03, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest using the smallest smudge tool. That might help. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  21:06, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think Icethroat did the original image...but I could be remembering wrong. Night Fall 04:48, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

If you want, I can do it for you? I use special brushes for mine ^^. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:39, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Any help would be welcome, Shady. XD I feel like I'm not doing anything at all. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   15:29, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Is this OK? I couldn't do to much because I didn't have the stripe layer... Darkhallows... Mew? 09:19, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I now worship you Shady!!!! Thanks! Okay, is there anything else I need to do? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   14:48, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 16:12, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

There is two white pixels by the ear nearest us  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 01:00, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar - Tweaked


Saw that this image needed to be tweaked and so I decided to do it. Had to zoom in the find the original shading so I just took it away and redid the whole shading. The white was kind of hard to do with the original creators choice of color so let me know if I need to do that some more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd darken the shading. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:00, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better but you should darken the shading Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:42, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">Out of my way, Kittypet! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">I'm not in the mood! 19:32, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MCA) - Tweaked
My first tweaked image. Original artist Minnowclaw. Comments? •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 13:32, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit; she looks nearly black. Otherwise good :) insane  brick'd 13:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 13:48, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

She only has one hind leg. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 20:47, July 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * That's because when this image was originally made, the injured foot was thought to not be visible from this angle; now that it's been changed and it's visible from this angle, add the hind leg again.  I c e  t h r  o a t   Just a   simple   sig...


 * Lighten her just a bit more, she's still to dark. Influx Lennon -   Ringo's Wife  10:22, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thunder(Lo)- Tweaked
Orginal artist was Honeyfur. All I did was thicken the shading. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:30, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I would blur the highlights as well. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   22:36, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading. No where does it say that I added highlights. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:44, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad.  Dawny  00:47, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow o  r Creamsplash  14:32, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Just blend the ear pink slightly. He looks good. -- Sandy star 22:44, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Sandy. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  12:18, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardfoot(Q)-Tweaked
Original artist was Spottedwing. I thickened the shading and added a few highlights. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:26, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink if it isn't blurred enough already  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 12:03, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the right eye a bit lighter. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  12:51, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Her right or our right? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  14:28, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, her right. XD <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  12:25, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  12:20, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Purdy - Redone
Okay, on the Nominations Page, it said his style needed to be re-done. So here he is. Original artist was me. ♥Ice storm★  00:27, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pinkish.  Dawny  00:36, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

You mean, lighten it? ♥Ice storm★  01:19, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

No, just define it, because it's blurred too much. I think that it will be the right pink once it's defined.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 01:33, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Brightheart (A) - Tweaked
Original artist myself... patch on head was deemed to be in the wrong position so I have uncovered the eye as requested. -- Sandy star 10:58, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patch on the leg (Or it might just be my computer) anyways its really good  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 12:01, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, which leg? -- Sandy star 13:57, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oops the one nearer to us my mistake :)  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 15:29, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandy star 21:25, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I would say to blur all the patches a little more, and darken the eye color as it is hard to see the light green against the white backdrop. Other than that this is marvelous. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 22:26, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandy star 06:59, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ashfur (A) - Tweaked
Original charart by Caroline Stimpson. I redid the shading and blurred the spots. Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 12:53, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe a bit more shading? It seems a little light to me. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">Out of my way, Kittypet! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">I'm not in the mood! 19:35, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

The spots seem to be bigger in his warrior image. Maybe make these ones bigger to match? And fix the shading in the tail; it looks like he has a lighter tail-tip and that it's not shaded. Oblivion Got it memorized?  22:19, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. Blur the tail shading and ear pink. ♥Ice storm★  12:28, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Made the spots bigger and blurred the tail shading and ear pink. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 15:17, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Bluestar (L) - Tweaked
Original artist was Shimmerpool. Okay, On the one on the left, all I did was add a shoulder scar, fix the blurred lineart and added a little shading. On the one on the right, I got creative and added some more shading and highlights, and fuzziness. Which one? I understanbd if you choose the left because of consistancy. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   15:46, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I chose the left. The one on the right looks a little dark. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  15:49, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Left. Although there could be a bit more highlights on the tail of the left one. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">Out of my way, Kittypet! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">I'm not in the mood! 15:57, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I choose the left but both of them are nice  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 16:13, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Probably the one on the left because of consistancy, but I like the one on the right better. You should put that on your userpage or something so it doesn't go to waste. Also, the scar looks a little smudged. See if you can make the blurring more even. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:59, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Left, only because the rest of her images look like that. I really like how you did the right one, though. Her gray muzzle on the left could use a bit more blurring. Oblivion Got it memorized?  21:42, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Left. Darken the shading on that, and blur it, and also lighten the ear pink a bit. ♥Ice storm★  12:27, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

I like the left one a bit better, but the one on the right is lovely. Either way though, I'd make the scar longer Night  Fall 21:17, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made the scar longer, but I think if I lightened the ear pink it would mess it up. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   14:43, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Ki) - Tweaked
The original artist was Minnowclaw. I changed it to longhair for the bushy tail and to match the deputy image. Comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 03:58, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is a very good image Icethroat, maybe blur the shading some more and darken the ear pink. Also, the white stomach looks a bit grey on the right side (when looking at the image). -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 10:41, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty pretty! XD Blur the white transitions a smidge. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   13:29, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I blurred the white transition, darkened the ear pink, and blurred the shading.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 18:53, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad. Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  10:20, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Join?
Hi! I would like to join the PCA because Chararts look interesting! River  storm 14:27, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Riverstorm. I'll add you in right away. These links can help you: here and here. As Tweak Week is currently in progress, new members are not allowed to post up art, but you can always critique on other images for the time being. Thanks for your interest in joining! --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 16:25, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) - Redone
The original artist was Echopaw, I believe. The shading needed fixing and the colour lightening. After trying this I ended up redoing the whole image. -- Sandy star 15:22, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Very good, Sandy! I can't see anything wrong! <span style="color:Red; font family:Chalkduster; background:Black; border:5px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Saffron;">Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 16:10, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Extremely beautiful. =) The only thing I see is to shade the back leg furthest from us, as that would be shielded from the light source and would be darker than the rest of the shading. Other than, perfect. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 16:36, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandy star 20:04, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a bit hard to see. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 11:04, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Morningflower (W) - Tweaked


Original artist was Sandy. I added shading and highlights as with the others, reworked some of the patches for consistency, and reworked the ear pink a bit as well. Further suggestions? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 16:21, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Very good! =) Just one thing. the patch by her eye makes the ear pink very unoticable. Maybe make the ear pink just a tad bit bigger, or make the patch by her eye a bit smaller. Just my opinion  River   storm 17:12, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yah lighten the ear pink Rainear   May Starclan light your path

Broadened and lightened the ear pink; nice catch with the spot, Riverstorm. I've shrunk it slightly. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 18:32, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (P3) - Redone
I'm the original artist. It was nominated for shading issues. I tried to edit the shading, but that didn't work very well, so I ended up redoing the entire image. Comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 19:53, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Very good shading! Maybe make the ear pink a darker shade. It looks a bit bright now. Oblivion Got it memorized?  20:00, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

It needs the pink of a white cat not a darker pink cause Ear pink on white cats is very light pink  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 20:08, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Jumpfoot (W) - Tweaked


Original artist was Hawkfire98. Added shading and highlights, did a thorough blurring job of everything, and changed the eye. Further suggestions? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 21:02, July 20, 2010 (UTC)


 * This is lovely. I envy your black cat skills XD The ear pink looks a little purple though. I think changing it for something more like Leopardfoot or Whitethroat etc would be better =) -- Sandy star 21:09, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Dawncloud (Q) Tweaked
The orinal artist was either Sandy or Bramble; sorry, I'm not exactly sure. Anyway, I desaturated and darkened her to make her look more like her other images. I also changed the eye style because she looked cross-eyed before xD Comments? Night Fall 22:04, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

It was Bramble. :) Make the shading darker. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 10:51, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose (Ki) Redone
Original artist was Firepelt. I had to redo him, the shading was a bit messy and I had to change the color completely. Comments? Night Fall 22:04, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on <-- side. ♥Ice storm★  22:49, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the paws.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 23:03, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I fixed the blurred lineart. Ice, that's where the light source is coming from ;) Night  Fall 02:58, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) - Tweaked
Original user was FirePelt. He needed spiky fur, but since I needed to pretty much redo the tail, I added some more shading. Suggestions? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 10:37, July 21, 2010 (UTC)