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Swallowtail (RC) (E) - Redone
I have permision now, don't worry :). Original artist was Bramble, shading needed tweaking and stripes needed to match the warriors :D . Comments?  Elorisa   19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the smudges :3 20:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I personally like the smudges. The make him look furry, which is brilliant to me. I think you should just enlarge the ear-pink a bit. 20:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like the smudges too, Shellheart. They're just a little sharp. 21:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say leave 'em as they are. They look good to me :3 23:55 Sun Oct 23

Reuploaded~better?  Elorisa   02:02, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the reddish parts on her haunch and her leg? 17:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the ear-pink curve round more at the top. 08:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I didn't see any reddish parts...:/  Elorisa   20:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights looks blotchy. 22:52, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I redid it..again xD. The shading was wonky and icky, so I fixed it *throws confetti* comments? :3.  Elorisa   15:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a little green to me... Maybe darken her a little? 15:51, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink and blur the shading a tad -Guradian 01:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and darken the stripes to match her warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:35, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur her spots more. 20:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:58, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh how I love xcf. files >:3 22:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little too dark, or too yellow. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 00:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I took all the colors from her leader image.... 00:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure you took them from the right spots of the image though. The spots look a little green... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail needs highlights. 22:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are not mandatory. 04:00, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think what you meant to say, Dapplecloud, was that the tail needs an area where there isn't any shading. Am I correct? 06:13 Fri Oct 28

Reuploaded Eh... -- 20:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful. Make the earpink slightly more pink. 01:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her front legs. 12:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 14:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image needs to be lightened to match her other images. And I know highlights aren't mandatory USUALLY, but the other images all have highlights. Should this on have them too so they match? Unless you can match the 'shiny' look without highlights. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

And also move the three stripes up a bit to match the other images. 17:40, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink so that it matches her other images. 19:56, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Q) - Tweaked
Orginal artist was Hawkfire, shading and highlights needed tweaking. Comments? Elorisa  19:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The muzzle looks white because of the highlight, could you please fix that. And it looks like there's blurred lineart now. It wasn't listed for that I know, but I don't remember it being there before you tweaked it, so I think you should fix it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really odd and blotchy to me... I don't know. 15:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''tried blurring and tweaking the shading... :/  Elorisa   15:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred a lot. Try what you can, and if you have to, maybe you can redo it. 18:00, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks blurred still, and the muzzle still looks white. 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:39, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It looks blotchy. 01:40, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Flowerstar - Tweaked
OA=Dawnfeather & i burned in the stripes. Soooo comments? 22:29, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the tail a bit? This looks cool! 22:35, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the 'M' on her forhead as well. Nice job --Guradian109822:37, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:42, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the patches more ginger? They look brown to me. 22:43, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose pink match the ear-pink. 12:36, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This = amazing! Blur the right side of her cheek, beside the eye. 18:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Guys. This is being tweaked for the stripes, and JUST the stripes. don't comment on anything else. The stripes on the tail, though they look cool, look kinda like dotted lines? Could you make them look more.... connected? The is beautiful! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:20, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

But I can see it, it needs to be blurred. This tweak is supposed to make the image look better, and that's what we're commenting on. 20:10, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, wha? So should I do all these things or not? Cause I already got the file right here and Im sittin here wondering if I should reupload or not - 02:26, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

My say probably won't count, but I would say do those things, if an image needs fixed, it needs fixed. 15:44, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

I personally think it's wonderful the way it is. 03:59, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ya do what they say youre now allowed to comment on other things that the image wasnt nominated for. Looks good. 00:47, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (W)~ Redone
OA was Nightshine and it needed to be brown and nobody likes triangle tabbies so heres this. 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot more, especially around the highlights (if you use them, of course) Guradian1098 01:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks pinkish-cream, not brown. 02:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

At least tint the base color to be more brown. 03:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ear farest from us. and her base coat looks gray, make the base coat match her elder. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't need to change it to match Oblivion's; she posted first, so Oblivion's should match hers. Lighten the shading a tad. 00:59 Sun Oct 30

As I suggested below, she should talk it over with Oblivion, and see what should be done. It shouldn't just be "Oh, she posted first" sort of thing. It's not fair to either artist. 23:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I've left Iceheart a message on her talk page. Now it's just a matter of waiting until she replies :3 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- sorry guys ive been crazy busy. 01:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E) - Tweak
Shading needed to be blurred, and OA was Sandstar I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:07, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the back please, and blur the earpink a little bit. 17:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Shading's fine. Just blur the ear pink, please - 18:38, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:18, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Er... I don't know how to say this, but could we add this to the redo list for its colouring? It really looks more dark-yellow than brown. 01:01 Sun Oct 30

Its close enough. Blur the earpink a tad more. Lovely image Guradian1098 01:08, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Since he's "mangy", maybe you could add some patches of skin/tufts of fur on him? 21:19, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

You missed a pixel in his eye; colour it in so it's not white XD 02:54 Mon Oct 31

No I didn't Wildy, that's just one of the shades in there. I use a really light, and a really dark shade to add depth to my eyes. And I just noticed that 'mangy' part of his description. I can't decide which to do though, missing patches, or messy patches? What do you guys think? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:05, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say missing patches. I honestly can't see any colour: I even zoomed in on GIMP. Maybe the changes aren't showing? I dunno. 03:09 Mon Oct 31

I'd say do both, just to be safe :3 I've seen a mangy dog, and it had both, so... 03:10, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Which pixel are you talking about Wildheart, because the one I THINK you're looking at, clearly has color for me when I zoomed in in gimp. I copied this version of the file just to be safe, and it does. And alright, I'll get working on the fur now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:15, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ewwwwww, I really hate how this turned out. DX ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:29, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, no, it looks great! There's just the one patch on the top of his lower back where there shouldn't be skin sticking out off of his body, you know? 03:32, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Same on the head. Otherwise, beautiful :3 03:54 Mon Oct 31

Reuploaded - Ok, so, the lineart that's in those places is supposed to be fur, but I moved the skin color down more so it doesn't look like it's sticking off the body. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:45, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Redone
The next one on her lineup. Redone to match the MC. Comments? 00:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the artist before you? And maybe add some more stripes so it matches the medicine cat image .Blur the ear pink, too Guradian1098 01:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I don't know and tbh I don't care. I can't add anymore stripes because I don't know where to put them, but I will blur the ear pink. 01:17, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It took me a few seconds to look up the OA of this image. 02:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, I'm not you, and for your information, this project is concerned for the welfare of images and not for OAs. 02:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Icestorm, it's not that big of a deal and I thought we were supposed to say the OA anyway? Lighten the shading on her flank a tad. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Does it really matter who the OA is? Sometimes, it's hard to tell, 'cause most of these were moved from other file names. 02:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have shading on the flank. Do you mean the midriff? 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Flank = the area where your kidneys are. Judging by its location in a human, as well as Brackenfur's scar, I'd say it's where the shading is too dark. 02:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ohfail. I was thinking the My Little Pony flanks...where they have their cutie marks...yeahsorry XD 02:54, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink a bit. 19:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there's some smudged lineart on the tail; fix that. 06:09 Sun Oct 30

Re-Uploaded: Lightened shading on flank, blurred back shading, blurred earpink. Where is the smudged lineart? The lineart is perfectly fine. 14:29, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there waste all around the image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not. There is waste all around it. 16:49, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 10:14 Mon Oct 31

And blur the ear-pink too. 17:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (E) - Redone
Eh, not too sure about this one... Should I change the stripes to match her warrior? I'm terrible at that tabby style, though ;_; 11:40, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I really love these stripes you did, though... Anyway, define the earpink a lot. 14:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This style of ear-pink looks good only on the leader charart, made it different. Leaf-storm,15:57,October 29,2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. 16:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like this style of ear pink. Less hassle. xD Blur the shading. 17:58, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like it too :P Blur the shading on the hindquarters, I love this image by the way! 18:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.' 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you change this so that it matches Iceheart's image? She was the first to post it, so it should match hers. 00:54 Sun Oct 30

I'm fine with changing the stripes, but I'm hesitant to change the colour. Personally - with absolutely no offence at all to Iceheart - I think the shade of brown in this image is more suitable. People have even been asking Iceheart to change her colour to make it more brown. I'm open to suggestions, though. 02:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, both images' color need to be changed. Iceheart's needs to be more brown, and I think this needs to be a little less pink/red. could you fix that? And honestly, though Icy's image is gorgeous, I like these stripes better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:13, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

No offense to Iceheart, but I like this style of stripes better. I think both of you should talk it out and see which one you like better. 17:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change this to match mine? Technically you shouldnt even be doing this but one exception to the rule isnt a huge deal. Still its my pattern well go with 00:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Must you really be so mean about it? She already said she would change it. 00:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsetail (P3) (Q) - Tweaked
Now I know this wasn't on the tweak list (I could add it now if you want), but it needed to be tweaked. Original artist was Sandy, and the shading needed to be darkened and the patches needed to be tweaked, as far as I can see. 15:25, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! Make the ear-pink a bit pinker. 17:18, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:32, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 10:15 Mon Oct 31

Darken it a bit too. -- 20:08, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Heh, forgot to say it yesterday. 17:08, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur (Ki) - Redone
I guess it's okay to put this up, since it was on the make-overs list. Original artist was Icethroat, and it needed to be longhaired and match the warrior image. 22:44, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a little more. Pretty! 03:59, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:38, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and it'll be perfect :3 23:04 Wed Nov 2

Reuploaded 01:28, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sasha (Q) - Redone
Original artist was *Ivypool*. She needed to be redone to match her other images. :3 Comments? 00:25, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. *steals* Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 02:19, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit more. Amazing job :) 02:28, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks guys. :3 20:30, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink a bit smaller. Great job, but was this listed to be redone? I didn't see it n the list... ` 00:56, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well it's on there. xD Also, the earpink kind of blends in with the darker ear pelt, but that's what color it is on her other images. Anyway, '''reuploaded. ''' 02:18, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Jag (CG) - Redone
Yay a cave-guard! OA was Grayravenpaw. The mud needed to be smudged, there was blurred lineart in many places, the shading needed fixed, and I also noticed that his description says that he is dark gray, which before, he was not. I hope it's ok that I did a new color for it (if need be I can tweak the loner too, or if it's not ok I'll put it back to it's original color). The dark gray color is like Crowfeather's. Comments for improvement? 21:26, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

OH, I almost forgot, it was indeed listed to be redone. Sorry! 23:25, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/ smudge the mud into the pelt more, and make the earpink smaller - 03:58, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and lighten the mottles on the mud. This is great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:52, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? 00:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (Ki) - Redone
Needed to match the warrior :3 OA was Mumble, and was tweaked by Iceheart. Comments? <span style="">23:07 Tue Nov 1

Cuuuuute! Make the nose dark gray/black though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:12, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the whole thing, it seems a bit lighter than his warrior image. Good job! 19:50, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :3 <span style="">22:52 Wed Nov 2

Nightstar (L) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be thickened and blurred, and I made the eyes amber instead of brown, though that wasn't listed, since it wasn't natural. Hard to tell who the OA was, but I THINK it was Mumble785. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:55, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and changes aren't showing yet. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:56, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading alot more; he was described glossy, yes? Guradian 03:59, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading's dark enough, but yes he was described as glossy. Should I add a layer of highlights over this then? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:48, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (K) - Redone
OA was Echostar229, Tweaked by Moonleaf, Wildheart, and Iceheart, I think... Since I already tweaked her warrior and queen charart, I figured that I should just finish, besides it was supposed to be lighter. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:57, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (CG) - Redone
OA was Hiddensun. It needed to be brown-gray and was on the redo list. Comments? 03:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, the stripes look hard-edged. Blur them, please. Beautiful image, by the way ^^ -Guradian04:06, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Didn't Dapplecloud reserve her elder version already?... 21:47, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, dang it, she did. I'll ask her if I can have it since I already put this up, but I'm fine if it gets declined. 22:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ruby (KP) - Redone
I saw the shadings need blurring, I was thinking that I can only tweak but when I looked on it on my computer i saw that whole lineart is blurred. I take the base colour from it, other are new. OA is, I think MosspathOfSkyClan, Leaf-storm,13:25,November 2,2011 (UTC)

Was this on the list? And did you get permission to redo her? 19:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She also needs a black/dark grey nose. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- Gathering the army of <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> Trolls 22:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think Leaf's okay with this one. Blurred lineart is a pain in the butt to fix. xD 00:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Whitetail (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar tweaked by Darkhallows and the shading needed completely redoing (it was pink). I know the original image was long-haired, but we had this discussion with Firestar and thick fur doesn't represent length. Although I'm fine with changing it back to long-haired. 16:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

The image looks a bit distorted for some reason. Not sure if you have the wrong file size or if it's just the page. Also, this needs to have been on the tweak page before being redone. Sorry to pry, it's just the rule. Ah, nevermind, found it. But I honestly think she was fine as a long haired cat. I know thick doesn't always equate to long, but with her I think it did. Your choice, though. 21:34, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

You'd have total freedom if she had only one image, but unfortunately she doesn't. If you change yours to short haired, then it's just more work for the rest of the project to change her other two images to short haired. Could you change it back to longhaired please? 22:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded No worries XD 22:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lily (KP) - Redone
She needed to match the colours and markings of her sister. OA was Nightfall. Comments? 22:00, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading. <span style="">01:25 Thu Nov 3

Sweetpaw (K) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine, and the tortoiseshell patches and shading needed to be redone, and I have Scarletwind's permission. Yes, I know this is my declined version of Spottedpelt, and its not being used, so I can use it. Tortoiseshell and white is the same as white with tortie patches, and Sweetpaw has been mentioned as a regular tortoiseshell. 23:51, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

This has to match her apprentice version, does it not? 00:00, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well her apprentice version is going to be redone too when i finish the blanks. This needs to have more white. Shes white with tortoisshell patches not tortoiseshell with white patches. 00:40, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Flora (Ro) - Tweaked
Original artist is Minnowclaw/Swallowtip and shading needed to be thicker... 01:19, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine. She was listed to be redone since her chaart depicted her as brown, and she was supposed to be dark red. Her colors come from a darkened Foxleap (including earpink). Stripes were kept almost identical, except I added some extra thin stripes and altered a few. I have a feeling this image may be a tad dark, what do you think? Comments for improvement? 01:41, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, this looks really freaking cool. Blur the ear pink, Miss Awesome-Charart-Maker.XD 01:44, November 3, 2011 (UTC)