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Swallowtail (WC) (W) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be redone, and I accidently erased the earpink so I had to do that along with the shading.. Sorry. Dx OA was Icecloud33. Oh, and according to the new rule do I have to do her kit image along with this one? M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:20, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the shoulder highlight more circular. 21:12, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And lighten the earpink a tad. 21:18, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And no, you don't have to do her kit if you just tweaked the shading on this one. It's only if it's a major change. You're more than welcome to reserve it, though. 03:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, thanks for telling me. ^-^ Hopefully I blurred the shading enough, and I brightened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   03:26, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit more and thicken it on the shoulder a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:51, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is working, I'm new to GIMP... M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:13, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot about the waste.. >.< M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:17, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could use a bit more blurring (gaussian blur) and center the earpink a bit. :3 16:15, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink too. 23:58 Sun Nov 20

Reuploaded Decided to re-do the shading, didn't really like it here :P This time the earpink stayed xD M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   21:36, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. It looks solid. 21:50 Mon Nov 21

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:10, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:12 Mon Nov 21

Is it okay if I withdraw this? I'm just not really interested anymore.. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   23:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, I guess I'll keep it. I hate giving up even on a small project. xD  01:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken and thicken the shading along the back please? 18:57, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done :3  14:48, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to center the ear pink and blur the shading. 16:07, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and blurred the shading. 21:12, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad and make the ear pink visible. It's visible but it looks odd. 23:03, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and fixed the earpink. 01:43, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear-pink a tad. 16:56, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pixlr fails at blurring xD  17:10, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading more? And BTW, not sure if you know already, but Pixlr has a Gaussian blur too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:12, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I use a different program, though I just felt like blurring it on pixlr. xD  15:28, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a tad and blur it. 07:54 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded How does it look? 20:31, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lionheart (W)- Tweaked
Bahahaaha. FAIL. xD Trollsky She who Trolls everything 21:36, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

To avoid Atelda eating me, Oa is Dawnfeather. He needed thicker fur around the neck. Trollsky She who Trolls everything 22:09, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

No offense...but how is this thicker fur? I had no idea what it was until you posted this comment. Imo, it looks nothing like fur. It just looks like a black zig-zag...like a black scar. I'm not sure how to fix it, because I'm blank of ideas right now. Icestorm not signed in

I suggest thickening the fur on both sides of his neck. 22:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

How's this? (fail. X_X) Trollsky She who Trolls everything 22:43, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Better, just erase the lines in the middle of his neck. 00:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Troll-de-mort Eh heh heh. 00:57, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It didn't change o.o 01:02, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Changes might not be showing. :P Troll-de-mort Eh heh heh. 01:06, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

But I'm looking at the thumbnails for this version and its previous version, and they're the exact same. Normally, even if changes aren't showing, the thumbnail shows the changes. Anyway, I'll just wait :D 01:09, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the changes are showing for me, and sometimes it doesn't even show in the history. :/ Troll-de-mort Eh heh heh. 01:13, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Put some shading on the fluffeh part. :3 04:21, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. X_X <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 19:28, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It kinda freaks me out x3. Add a bit more shading? Kinda hard to tell where it is for me. 23:07, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I know, eh? XD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 23:30, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaller. <span style="">00:20 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 01:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the colours are starting to look kinda green-tinged... is it just me, or does anybody else see it? I'd say if you won't change the colours you definitely need to darken the shading and considerably lighten whatever shading you have on the edges of the mane-thingie so it looks like the parts closer to him are in shade and the parts that stick out aren't. I don't know if any of what I just said made sense XD <span style="">04:40 Fri Nov 25

If you look right above the part where you shaded on the tuft, you can see a drastic change in.. I don't know if that's shading or what. But can you smooth it out? You'll know what it would be if you see it xD -- 21:29, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's because there's highlights all over the image, but not on the edited part. Add some there. 23:29, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 00:46, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

The mane's lineart doesn't seem consistent with the rest of his lines. I think, to remedy that, thicken it everywhere except the tips so it flows smoother. It doesn't seem that me mane flows with gravity much either, it needs some pull on it. A great reference for maned cats are Maine Coons. They have lush ruffs around their necks and are a good example on how gravity would work on them. Great job, by the way. 00:53, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I failed at it... <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 01:16, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you planning on doing all his images? Cause I actually really wanna do either his deputy or his kit. XD I didn't know till now that we were actually giving him a mane. :P Anyways, lighten the whole image a bit to match the deputy image. Good job. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:34, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the mane a different color than the actual pelt? <span style="">22:54, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

Yeah the colours are changing from all the blurring. I can't tell you to redo them, but it does look really odd. <span style="">02:09 Sun Nov 27

Naw, Pale, I'm not. I'm going to redo this and try again.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 03:52, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

And I mean as in the mane, not the whole thing.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 03:53, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok cool. :) And I personally think this should just be redone completely, but that's just me... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:08, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ya reckon? I don't wanna mess up a nice image... <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 18:37, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the mane. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 19:15, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yay it's not freaky anymore 8D. Maybe add another stripe on his mane? 19:23, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Das good? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 20:00, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Blur the shading please. <span style="">06:42, Mon, Nov, 28, 2011

Re-uploaded. Since I don't have the layers, I added some shading and blurred that, cause I'll probably mess it up otherwise. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 18:35, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Jag (Ro) ~ Redone
He was on the redo list because he needed to match his caveguard. The OA is Frostheart♥. Comments? 23:55, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Where's the earpink? XDD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 23:58, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud on the forehead. ^^ :P <span style="">01:52 Thu Nov 24

Define the highlights on the back leg's haunch. 23:05, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm dumb. I forgot teh earpink. -_- 01:00, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink, mon ami? :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 03:09, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. As you wish, dear Sky. <3 23:47, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit larger please! <span style="">13:01 Sun Nov 27

Forgot to mention. Reuploaded. 20:44, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the mud. And the pelt too, it kinda looks black - 02:23, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:44, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) - Redone
Okay... HUGE tortie fail... Well, it had to be redone. OA was .Skystar. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:54, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste above the tail and define the shading a bit. <span style="">23:00, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

Brighten the ginger ot match the warrior and blur the smudging a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:09, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:53, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing I have issues with is how the smudging is on her head. Make them all go the same way. Right now it looks like her fur is parted in the middle XD There's also some waste above her tail. <span style="">02:15 Sun Nov 27

T be an OA...is weird. xD Make the ear pink more visible.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 04:19, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:33, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

The smudges on her head still need to be going in the same direction :3 Otherwise, beautiful <span style="">08:02 Mon Nov 28

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:32, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

The white on the belly and tail tip look darker then the white on the face. Is it supposed to be like that? Me wants to steal beautiful charart. 22:41, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think that's just because of the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:43, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Scree (CG) - Redone
Original artist is Ashshadow, and it needed mud, stripes to be seperated, and earpink needed to be tweaked. So...yeah...eww. 23:07, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks neat! The edges of the mud need blurred some (you don't have to do it to the point where it doesn't look crisp anymore) and add shading/mottles to it for a natural look. If you don't know exctly how it should look, check out my interpretation of Screech :3 23:24, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I was so confused about the mottles at first xD. 23:33, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the mud steak on the flank a bit more and darken the shading under the chin. Nice work, Atelda! ;) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:00, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! 00:22, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mud a bit. <span style="">03:46 Sun Nov 27

Reuploaded. Blurred :P 04:16, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I just realized that this is my reservation. Um. Atelda... <span style="">06:09 Sun Nov 27

I am a derp. A complete and utter derp. Heh, sorry 'bout that, Wildheart. 06:17, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

...and I just finished it and was about to post it. Um. 'teldaaaaaa <span style="">06:19 Sun Nov 27

Eep! Don't spam my talk page or get your wildheart stink all over it! D: Heh, take over, then viewers won't have their eyes bleed out because of my ... yeah. :P Have fun! *ditches and runs*  17:07, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Really? You don't mind? 'Cause this is bootiful... but... augh <span style="">04:59 Mon Nov 28

Not at all! :P You reserved it. :3 05:01, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, feel free to revert my edit if you change your mind, Atelda. This is baad... <span style="">07:47 Mon Nov 28

Woop! That's sessaay. Darken the shading, please :3 20:45, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I adore you, Splashy. <3 <span style="">23:40 Mon Nov 28

Willowpelt (Q) - Tweaked
OA was Bramble. I re-did the shading, and the eye color didn't look like her warrior one, so I made them more alike. Comments? 23:43, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know you didn't tweak the earpink, but can you blur it please? Nice work on the shading. 23:49, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I forgot to thank/mention Atelda for teaching me how to redo the shading. :3 23:52, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 99.89.95.201 00:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - ^_^ 00:11, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me up there. xD 00:12, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the non-shaded part on the belly over the the left and brighten the earpink. <span style="">02:16 Sun Nov 27

Re-Uploaded 05:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

And make that highlight bigger - 02:22, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfur (W) - Tweaked
Watch out peeps, Im on a roll with solids right now BD

OA= Warrior&lt;3 05:04, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Er, what needed to be tweaked? The shading? Anyways, make the earpink a bit smaller and define the shading on the tail. Awesome, Bloo! xD 05:28, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Yep, same as all the other solids before. pssshh, finally a comment - 05:46, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the earpink a bit. This is so prettyyyy <3 <span style="">08:03 Mon Nov 28

Runningbrook (W) - Tweaked
I love tweaking, ok I darkened shadings and added some stripes, Echomist is OA 11:15,November 27,2011 (UTC)

Seperate the stripes on the rump please. <span style="">13:07 Sun Nov 27

Of course, thanks, reuploaded 17:42,November 27,2011 (UTC)

Looks kinda weird with all the stripes bunched up on the body and with only two stripes on the face. How about adding some there? - 02:21, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, awful o_O 15:07,November 28,2011 (UTC)

Sasha (KP) - Redone
I got permission to redo this, since it was HORRIBLE, in my opinion. The shading and highlights were pretty blotchy. Original artist was FirePelt, then redone by me. I also made the collar more like her collar in the manga. Comments? 15:03, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and possibly tone down the earpink. 15:49, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:15, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Make the ear-pink a tad smaller. <span style="">21:06 Sun Nov 27

Reuploaded 23:08, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Either add more stripes to the front leg or make them thicker, cause they look too far apart - 02:20, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:06, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Jacques (KP) - Tweaked
Okay... Jacques here needed his shading re-done, because it was blotchy, and he needed a torn ear. OA was Icethroat21. Comments? 16:31, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the shading a tad. 19:24, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:39, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (Ki) - Tweaked
Needed to match his warrior. OA was Icethroat. I redid the shading and desaturated it so it was more grey. Comments? 18:41, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (E) ~ Redone
OA was Dawnfeather with tweaks by Night Shine and Oblivion. Needed to be brown, comments? 01:03, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. 01:20, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There is some gray lineart on the chest and the paws, can you fix that? 02:16, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the base fur colour just a tad. 01:21, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Princess (KP) ~ Tweaked
Darkened the shading. OA is...umm... Mousetalon, I think. *should have looked at the file page* xD 05:35, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely, please can you edit the stripe on her head and made M stripe? 15:04,November 28,2011 (UTC)

It was on the list for the shading. I'm not touching it. 16:58, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lilystar (L) - Tweaked
Ehm, hello? Its me agin, I tweaked Lilystar, blurred hightlinks and darkened shadings..hmm it looks a little like redoned shadings o_O Oh and Darkhallows is OA 18:40,November 28,2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and neck shading a lot, and possibly tone down the eyes. 20:41, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the end of the haunch and white pixels on the tail, paws, and on the left side of the cat. 00:23, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, reuploaded 10:11,November 29,2011 (UTC)

Susan (KP) ~ Redone
Pretty much did nothing but fix some miscolored lineart. I still have to put it up here, right? 22:28, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

And OA was *Ivypool* 22:42, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

No offence to Ivypool, but this really looks like it needs to be redone. The highlights are way too bright and needed to be blurred, it looks like the stripes are actually on top of the shading/highlights, and the base fur colour needs to be darkened or the stripes need to be lightened so she actually looks like a brown tabby and there isn't such a big difference between base colour and stripe colour. But it's your choice. 01:24, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Decided to go for it.. Fail on my part. xD 03:04, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) ~ Redone
I think this should be okay to put up, because Mistystar's version got declined. OA was Hollyberry and the shading was blotchy and it needed to be red-brown. 22:43, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Socks (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA was Nightfall101 and the shading was blotchy. 22:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. Nice job ^^ <span style="">23:43 Mon Nov 28

Jumpfoot (W) - Redone
I got permission to re-do this, and I noticed whenever I make a charart I hate, then put it up, everyone LOVES it. Original artist was Hawkfire, with tweaks by Sandstar, Brambleclaw, and Bramble. Comments? 23:35, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lol <3 Lighten the base coat and darken the shading. Darken the earpink a tad and blur it. Pwetty. <span style="">23:41 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded I was right. 23:47, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste :3 I know, so well thought out, right. 23:50, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I thought I already erased it. 00:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Missed some between the legs :3 erase that. <span style="">00:10 Tue Nov 29

Reuploaded Oh. 00:18, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define/lighten the shading. It's a bit hard to see. 01:13, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Green eyes, Moonleaf :3 01:20, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (W)~ Tweaked
Needed tuffed ears, Im the OA. 23:54, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (SC) - Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this, 'cause no matter what I did (colourizing, dodging, whatever) it just ended up turning bright yellow or neon orange -_- I preferred the old version. But it did need to be pale... so comments? Oh, and the OAs were me and Scarlet <span style="">00:56 Tue Nov 29

Lovely! <3 Define the light on the tail, and define the earpink. 01:03, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded mreh <span style="">01:32 Tue Nov 29

Sparrowfeather (DF) (W) - Tweaked
That shading has been bugging the living daylights out of me since the day it was approved, so I redid it. OA was myself. 01:45, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit. Well done. 05:05, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:38, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Dovestar (WC) (L) - Tweaked
As much as it may look it, I swear this isn't redone. I lightened the whole image, tweaked the shading, dulled the earpink, and lightened the eyes. OA was Brambleclaw14, Cloudskye and Icestorm? Not sure. XD Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:33, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Barkface (MC) - Tweaked
Just tweaked the shading, it was blotchy. OA was Icethroat21. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:36, November 29, 2011 (UTC)