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Dawncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
Boom. All colors colorpicked from the elder that Jayie has for approval. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:06, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on her belly a bit (I know it's artist's choice but it seems a little too dark), and I don't think her stripes really match the other images, but that might just be me 20:04, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I can't do anything with the stripes. I copied from the elder best I could. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:26, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

It could just be me, but the base coat looks a little light. 10:21 PM, Tue Jul 29, 2014

I think it's because of the highlights. Maybe dull them some? Wow... *o* 22:26 Tue Jul 29

the stripes don't match, possible add more. 01:07, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too thin, and there should be striping on the head. I think the highlighting might be a little too bright as well compared to the other Dawncloud images, but that might be up to artist preference, not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:10, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled the highlights, thickened the stripes, and lightened the face shading so you could see the face stripes. I matched the stripes the best I could, and spent about two hours on them. I even pasted the Elder on another layer to use as reference. Queens' bellies are stretched, so so is the pattern, to be fair. (And Duck, adding more stripes probably won't make it match more, because she never had more stripes then this in the first place) Pls don't kill me  Shinxy  Blitz  and  Melody  09:08, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Does she have texture, or is that just the way you've done the shading? 11:35, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

It's shading. I smudged rather then blurred. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:05, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, if you look at her StarClanner, she does have more stripes than this facing this way, adding more, would make it match more. 17:47, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. OK, Shinx confirmed for derp. Added some more stripes, although I don't have room for any more. If someone complains, I'll just redo them. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:37, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit its desaturating her colors. 22:45 Wed Jul 30 2014

There's waste under the belly and on the front leg farthest to us. Brick  09:33, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:58, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 19:11, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a teeny bit. This is lovely. *.*

Re-uploaded Thank you! Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

make the stripes more pixel-y 18:31, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

I'm afraid I can't, I tried. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:53, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

You can't unblur them?

Nope. I used the sharpen tool, and it won't work any more. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  19:17, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

try filters>enhance>sharpen, because the stripes on the other images look more pixel-y and less blurred than this image and it's causing this image not to match as well as the others. 14:00, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  17:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the two front legs. This is really good :).--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:20, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Sunfish (Q) - For Approval
fish fish fish fish fish >(,·) 17:24, July 30, 2014 (UTC)\

dull the earpink a bit? fish fish fishy fish fish 6:10 PM, Wed Jul 30, 2014

>)))),·) 19:19, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The leg shading is a bit flat... <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:38, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

><((("> 23:06, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out her leg and chest shading, and define the light on her legs 13:25, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

<º)))>< 21:08, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the depth in the belly shading. Teldy x fish

Still working? 14:04, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

<')))>< #bandcamp   16:23, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Duskfur (Q) - For Approval
Changes are here.

define the belly, tail, and chest shading a tick? <span style="">11:27 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading since I didn't like the first one and shading this isn't as easy as it looks.

Try making the stripes curve some more. 01:41, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

They don't curve at all on the warrior. If I made them curve, I think it would divert from the original pattern. Pregnant or not, I don't want to teeter too far away from the pattern Twee made, and they don't curve very much on the original queen image or warrior (I was trying to match the warrior and queen both tbh), so unless someone else agrees, I'd really rather not change it.

Yes, but just because of the perspective, I think they should bend like (((( a bit, because if she's coming towards you the stripes would bend that way, as would the belly. It's less about the pregnancy and more about the perspective. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:48, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Perspective over pattern. Makes sense. Re-uploaded. Changes.

Wrenflight (Q) ~ For Approval
Hawky thinks she did a good job. <span style="">23:26 Thu Aug 7

Blur the tail shading a tad. Brick thinks Hawky did a good job. Brick  13:44, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

I smudged the shading so I'd rather not. Thank you, though. <span style="">18:24 Sat Aug 9

possibly use a soft-edged brush and just smudge the tail shading slightly, it does look quite hard-edged. 13:57, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">18:33 Sun Aug 10

Red (SD) (Ki) ~ For Approval
02:37, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink. I want this plz Imma steal it from you.

Bumble (Lo) ~ CBA
Um, did she still have a collar when she became loner? I didn't read the book.

She didn't have one that I can recall, but since I'm not sure, I think you should probably put one on her just in case.

Re-up ~ I put a collar on her with the colors of her kittypet version. Click for changes.

CBA?

Frost (StarClan) - For Evaluation
Did I do a good job? Tigerbird-The-Great 16:59, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, needs a texture, and the image isn't the right size. For the texture, I recommend asking David, the artist of Frost's rogue image, how he made his.

On Frost's page, It says he's thick furred. Tigerbird-The-Great 17:11, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thick fur does not mean long-haired. I have thicker hair, but it wasn't always as long as it is. I used to have it fairly shorter when I was younger, and it was pretty dang thick. The thickness refers to the density of the fur, not the length. Plus, you have an an image to match, and David uses the short-furred blank.

Define and darken the shading a tick, and blur the earpink. Very nice job on this. If it helps, for thick furred cats, to make the shading look less flat, I do two layers of dark blue shading, instead of black. <span style="">5:43 PM, Sat Aug 9, 2014

Did you shrink the lineart at all? It looks much smaller than it should and I don't think it's just displaying as a thumbnail Brick   09:58, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve this before posting it. If you're not gonna reserve it, I'll just decline it again. =P I told you this when you posted it before, and in chat, Tiger.

^ I also told Tiger in one of her lessons. Also, there's waste around the tail, and random black around the earpink. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:53, August 10, 2014 (UTC'''

Re-ups here: http://tinypic.com/r/21a9v1u/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 03:00, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink and maybe dull it a tad as it looks a bit neon right now. Also blur the texture a bit. And the tail suggest the lightsource for the shading is coming from the lower left, but the body suggests it's coming from upper right? Brick  07:51, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste around the head and the base of the tail. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:08, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups here: http://tinypic.com/r/14uci00/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 14:54, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

You still need to blur the earpink more. I also see waste outside of the tail, a black spot near his ear, and the image needs to be resized. He's also looking a bit cross eyed... so perhaps look at other StarClan images to see where the eyes are focused. I'd define the eye depth a little more, too. <span style="">4:21 PM, Mon Aug 11, 2014

Re-up here: http://tinypic.com/r/29wmxr6/8 Also thanks for the tips! Tigerbird-The-Great 17:01, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred. <span style="">17:37 Mon Aug 11

Unblurred lineart here: http://tinypic.com/r/sgpidg/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 17:45, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail, face, and leg shading, (read: add another layer of slightly less blurred shading, it makes it a appear darker while still being on the same opacity as the original layer, give or take), and perhaps the belly shading a little more too. Nice job on the eyes. <span style="">6:05 PM, Mon Aug 11, 2014

The color seems top be overlapping onto the lineart. Is your lineart layer the top one? <span style="">19:52 Mon Aug 11

You need to upload over File:Frost.star.png and post that image here. Just uploading it to tinypic doesn't show the changes here.

I fixed the charart alignment for you. Darken his texture a tad. His texture is a bit darker on his rogue image. Also, Define and add depth to his overall shading, and smudge/blur the earpink. And a little depth to his eyes wouldnt hurt either. Good charart for a beginner :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:23, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Hazelwing (Q) ~ For Approval
I tried. This doesn't match at all, does it? <span style="">19:36 Sat Aug 9

Changes. <span style="">19:37 Sat Aug 9

Nice work! Maybe try and shorten the strokes of the texture and blur it a touch. Also, maybe add one more layer of defined shading on the face? 19:50, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. c: <span style="">23:05 Sat Aug 9

Uh, her StarClan image doesn't have texture at all. Those are meant to be stripes. They're not really blurred at all on her StarClan image....This one actually matched a little better than the subsequent upload.

Would you like me to revert? However, I can't do much with the .xcf because I upload over the files and discard the old ones. If I'm missing something about images and GIMP please tell me <span style="">18:29 Sun Aug 10

Re-uploaded. I decided to redo the stripes. <span style="">0:48 Mon Aug 11

Define the light on the hindleg farthest from us. I know this pattern must have been a pain to do, Hawk xD. Great charart, like always :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:25, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank youuu c: <span style="">17:49 Tue Aug 12

Tallpoppy (Q) - For Approval
I'm not entirely sure I got the pattern to match right. Suggestions? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:23, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Oh yeah, and here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140810C/ezimba13931859337500.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

That pattern was probably a pain to do. Define the belly shading a tiiiiiny bit? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:58, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Echomist (Q) - For Approval
05:01, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Can you upload the changes somewhere? I can't see them.

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba18240393863200.png 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

The pattern fades into the shading, and I think the smudged shading should be thinner? This appears really thick in certain places, like the tail, and it throws it off..

re-uploaded 02:07, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Gonna harass you to upload the changes to ezimba again, dear. Might as well do that by default for a bit, since image changes aren't showing again. =/

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140813C/ezimba18240326878900.png 21:45, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Lilystem (Q) - For Approval
Oh lawdy ;-; Brick  10:29, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

http://i61.tinypic.com/33ttehg.png, the wiki is having one of those "I won't update images" days. Brick 10:30, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes, and smudge them. 12:53, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

she looks a bit cross-eyes 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2lar3m8.png, I didn't change the eyes because she doesn't look that cross eyed, more like she's looking at where she's walking. If someone else agrees that she looks derpy eyed I'll change it thought. Brick 14:44, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Duck; she does look a bit cross-eyed.

Re-ups,''' http://i57.tinypic.com/34t5nx3.png     and i must admit on second looking the old eyes did make her look overly interested in whatever she was staring at. Maybe she had just read that Rainflower was actually Stormkit and Oakkit's mother? '''

Try smudging the stripes the way of the belly, like on the warrior image. 17:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Shadepelt (Star) ~ For Evaluation


My first character SziriXxX (talk) 17:25, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. Wonderful job on her! <span style="">5:39 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Define the eye depth a tad and expand the earpink a bit. Brick  18:21, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba12232528268500.png Thank you Rocket c: SziriXxX (talk) 19:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Is this your first charart? It's amazing for a first O_o <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:55, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba12232512954900.png Thanks :3 SziriXxX (talk) 22:37, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (Lo) - For Approval
Okay, so I took the colors from the deputy, and I tried to match the stripes, but he has no images at this angle so I matched the pattern a bit on the face, legs, neck/chest area, and tail and the rest I improvised. <span style="">5:35 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Lighten the stripes to match the other images Brick   18:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

reups <span style="">6:31 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

if changes aren't showing <span style="">6:34 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Blur the stomach shading some. 21:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

reups <span style="">11:00 PM, Sun Aug 10, 2014

Pinestar (W) - For Approval
With as popular is The Ultimate Guide was, I'm shocked no one caught this. They called him a warrior..and Reedfeather got one for similar usage. They said "warrior-turned-kittypet", meaning he was a ThunderClan warrior at one point. I didn't know whether or not to give him his torn ear/scarred muzzle, so I did anyways just to be safe, but I can remove it if necessary. I fricken love Pinestar<3

Owl Feather (Alt. Q) - For Approval
changes 12:31, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (Star) ~ For Approval
He needed a StarClan image. Colorpicked from both his Kit and Apprentice images. I know this probably doesnt match 100%, but this was kinda fun to do =).

I used a blue tint for the shading. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:14, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the markings a bit (not a whole lot, I'd say) using a smaller, harder-edged brush.

'''Re-uploaded. '''I used a 1x brush to smudge it, (It was smudged already, but i smudged it a bit more.) And i also added some highlights since i forgot to add that when i first uploaded.

If changes arent showing, go here: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=30j1cie&s=8#.U-qGq-NdVKY

Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:29, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Mmhmm. Now, could you darken those same spots a little bit and shade the ear pink? If you want to shade the ears, that is. It's not mandatory.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Darkened spots and smudged them a tad bit more. I didnt want to shade the earpink, since it was throwing off the color of the pink. I will add shading there if someone else points that out, though. Is that better?

yes, Duck. If you still have the file. (Idk how to get it from you though.  Im a newb =/ )

If changes arent showing: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=20b1sw8&s=8#.U-qKneNdVKY~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:47, August 12, 2014 (UTC)