Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Mosspelt (Q) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed some darkening. OA was Nightfall with a tweak from Nightshine and a redo and some tweaks by Iceheart. Changes aren't showing, I believe. :P 19:14, August 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the ear-pink? 23:37, August 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her belly. 16:13, September 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I haven't really been on... School has been annoying. :P 21:03, September 2, 2012 (UTC)

If possible could you blur the "highlights" a tad, unless I'm looking at the wrong version. >.< 06:24, 03, 09, 2012

Lighten the shading on the white...it looks gray.

Reuploaded The shading got kind of messed up, so I just decided to redo it. I blurred the highlights a bit too. 21:04, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mosspelt (A) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked the shading to make it darker. Most recent OA was me. 13:16, August 31, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink on our right a tad? 13:53, August 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:32, September 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. 16:15, September 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:07, September 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge/blur the patches more to match the other image. Also darken the black/gray. It was meant to be black or very dark gray, the highlights simply make it look gray on the queen, so could you fix that? 14:14, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  LolIfail Changes probably aren't showing. 20:15, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya maybe blur th patches? they look harder edged compared to the queen. 00:24, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Run a small smudge brush through them too. Define the shading a bit more 04:04, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:52, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the white on the belly? It looks gray, even if it is in the shadow. 21:07, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was someone amazing. Mousty sent me the .xcf for the kit and elder, I got the colours from the elder, and texture, shading, highlights, stuff like that, is from the kit's .xcf. ( This fails so bad ;A; ) changes are here 08:20 Sun Sep 2

Re-uploaded I tried to make it match better xP 08:50 Sun Sep 2

Can you make the earpink on ---> side a little bit more triangular. This is amazing o3o. 10:48, September 2, 2012 (UTC)

Since it came from the kit's .xcf, I'd rather not. But if anyone else agrees, I'll gladly do so. 10:49 Sun Sep 2

Please do so, if you don't mind.

Re-uploaded Here 06:25 Mon Sep 3

Can you define the shading a little? x3 06:34, 03, 09, 2012

Re-uploaded 09:57 Mon Sep 3

Lighten the tail shading just a tad. 16:07, September 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brindleface (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Goldencloud, and I just added another layer of shading.

Lighten the shading just a tad? Gets pretty dark between the haunch and shoulder, and those kind of areas. Almost black. 14:15, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It wasn't that dark in photoshop... o.O

I know this wasn't on the list, but can you make the ear-pink a bit pinker and smudge/bur it a touch? 04:05, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mudpuddle (D) ~ Redone
OA was me, and I redid it so it was a little more natural. I //did// ask Paleh about this style, and she said it was fine. I figure, since his name //is// Mudpuddle...xDD

Can you make the earpink just a tad larger? 23:01, September 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'd rather not change the ear pink anymore...there are three/four different shades of brown on this, so finding a color that matches is a pain in the shading place.

Mapleshade (W) ~ Redone
Needed to be a tortie. OA was Mintstarr. Comments? 23:29, 03, 09, 2012

Would this and her queen images get scars? I mean, we're putting the ragged fur on all of them when it was described on her as a rogue (I think...), so why not the scars? 14:17, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see why not. It makes sense to me. 16:06, 04, 09, 2012

Re-uploaded 17:40, 04, 09, 2012

Love it! 8D Can you either blur or lighten the tail shading? It makes the tail look gray. 21:05, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D 00:22, 05, 09, 2012

Define the ear-pink 04:06, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

I can't, it's the same as the rogue. :c 04:14, 05, 09, 2012

Hollykit (NP) (Ki) - Tweaked
OA was the wonderful and incredible Cloudy. Slapped on another layer of shading and I also put a layer of texturing on (I can take it off it it makes her look too much like a tabby). Comments? 00:51, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Could you take the texture off? It does make her rather look like a tabby. 13:57, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just lightened the opacity on the texture 15:17, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Fix the ear pink on --> ear. It stands out more than it should, imho.

Re-uploaded 17:55, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad? It looks a bit flat right now. 21:07, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:46, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Pouncetail (E) - Tweaked
Just slapped another layer of shading on. Last OA was Mistystar. Comments? 00:51, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

uh is it me or is he a girl? 00:53, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Scarlet derp moment 01:00, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a bit? 15:24, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:53, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Macgyver (KP) - Tweaked
Tweaked to have shading defined. 14:26, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back. 15:41, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the white a little more white?

Define the earpink and can you brighten the ear color a bit? 21:08, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks like it edges away from the lineart, could you darken the shading around those areas. -or maybe I'm wrong o-o- 07:43, 05, 09, 2012

Re-Ups^ Not sure what you mean, DJ. e.e 19:07, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Icewhisker (MC) - Tweaked
Shading was blotchy and head shadin gneeded to be defined. The earpink fizzed out on me to I had to fix it too. 14:26, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tiny bit. 15:23, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his chest and neck. 15:41, September 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink.

Re-Ups^ 19:07, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the front legs and neck? 20:45, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brindleface (A) ~ Tweaked
Just defined the shading. OA was Iceheart22. 01:00, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - Tweaked
Most recent OA was Sweet, shading needed defining. Comments? =) 20:32, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading from the chest shading and up. 20:35, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the image in general 20:49, September 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:54, September 5, 2012 (UTC)