Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 180

Mallowfur (E) - Approved
LOL THIS IS SO BAD PLS DESTROY ME THX 11:21, June 22, 2017 (UTC)

Defibe the shading Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, June 22, 2017 (UTC)chat\

Nah this is pretty. The stripes on the star are a bit softer, so smudge them a little.

I feel like the stripes would be barely visible if they are smudged again. They're pretty soft as is, and the pattern could fade into the shading or fur if they're smudged anymore. 20:12, 6/22/2017

They need to be softer.

To me they seem soft as is, but I noticed the stripes are slightly darker-as per this http://vvcap.com/417u8wezFd2 And the earpink could match a small bit better. 20:18, 6/22/2017

The stripes are fine as they are, smudge-wise. They match well enough and they're not all that smudged on the Star and were never meant to be.

reup lol thanks star XD 17:46, June 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading?

Define all of the shading. 03:33, June 25, 2017 (UTC)

reup 10:23, June 25, 2017 (UTC)

To me, the stripes look like they blend in with the texture. So perhaps you could make the stripes stand out a little more? 14:25, June 27, 2017 (UTC)

done. lol how do u do art.... 05:01, June 28, 2017 (UTC)

Pretty :) CBA?

thanks man 02:02, June 30, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. 00:49, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Scorchfur (Ro) - Approved
I wanted to do something quick and simple 20:40, June 27, 2017 (UTC)

Good job! I love your charact art. Anyways, smooth out the shading everywhere and give some light to <-- leg. c: C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 20:49, June 27, 2017 (UTC)

Cosmo, which leg do you mean? The one closest to us or the one farthest from us? 20:54, June 27, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, forgot to say. The one farthest from us. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:10, June 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:26, June 28, 2017 (UTC)

The stomach shading is looking a bit blotchy 10:15, 6/28/2017

Reuploaded I think I fixed it. 12:46, June 28, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved. 00:49, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Kinktail (Ki) ~ Approved
Soo, I'm a bit confused. I changed the lineart and did the correct kit, but will I have to change anything to it? Then that would be different from the alt. and would not match. So does that mean no comments besides the tail? 22:02, June 27, 2017 (UTC)

I guess? Since this matches the alt exactly (besides the tail), whatever comments go on this would've had to go on the alt too.

Ok. 00:38, June 28, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail Nightskyleader (talk) 02:54, June 28, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reup 03:06, June 28, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved. 00:49, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Mallowtail (Star) ~ Approved
what moron made this pattern xd 01:28, June 28, 2017 (UTC)

oh boy I wonder who. Define flank shading a lil?

Maybe define the face shading a bit? Nightskyleader (talk) 01:38, June 28, 2017 (UTC)night

This is hot lmao. Define the tail shading a little 02:11, 6/28/2017

Define the eye depth a bit 16:27, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 18:58, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Really great job^^ CBA?

Approved. 00:49, July 1, 2017 (UTC)