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Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:09, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Try...Making the floof more fluffy and shaggy. It looks spikey now. :S 18:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. 21:01, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? 21:08, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And do kittypet kits need a collar...? I can't remember x.x 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

He wasn't a kittypet, he was a rouge or something, he was part of BloodClan as a kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 22:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Unsure on changes. 22:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 22:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Kill ze waste. 22:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the black a tad. 02:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiiiny bit lighter, so the white is lighter. (But then you might have to define the shading on the back. Doesn't make sence. =_=) 07:19, 08, 06, 2012

Re-Ups^ @Dazzy, I'd rather not smudge because it doesn't look smudged on the rogue and loner images. 21:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is kind of flat... Can you define the lightsource? 14:17, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Black and White cat shading. e.e 18:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks flat. Define the 'highlight' and enlarge it, and darken the shading. 18:37, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (Ki) - Redone
You are looking at failure. So hard to draw dem stripes on dis small, cute, little, adorable kit blank! Meh. Redone to match other images. Comments? 04:49, 09, 06, 2012

Define the shading. Nicely done.

Adorable <3 Maybe blur the stripes a Tiny bit, And possibly make his base coat more, cream? Not sure if thats the right word, more like his other images, looks a bit pink to me. -- 06:04, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. ^^ Raven, I wasn't quite sure what you ment, so I just airbrushed the coat color with a lighter, pinkish color a bit. 06:23, 10, 06, 2012

Define the shading more, and perhaps thin it out a bit as the color looks off cause of it. Also, where's your light source? I can't quite tell. 09:19, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit? 19:33 Sun Jun 10

Reuploaded -  Just redid the shading. 02:37, 11, 06, 2012

There's a little bit of waste around his tail. 19:26, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:58, 12, 06, 2012
 * Changes ain't showing. 06:02, 12, 06, 2012

Sunstrike (A) - Tweaked
OA was me and the patches needed to be blurred more to match the warrior (I have my reservations about the warrior looking too overblurred but that's probably just me)  05:36, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

While this is up, could you brighten the brown just a tad to match, and blur the earpink? 09:18, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) - Redone
- Erk this irks me. I'm thinking about redoing it (tomorrow. I have no energy left.) but I'm not sure...should I redo it to match the warrior/elder more, or should I keep it like this? Also please note this isn't the best I could do. My hand is burned and my brain is fried so xD 01:32, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, make it match the apprentice more as the blanks are on the same side. x3 06:06, 10, 06, 2012

Woah, hold on. I made it match the warrior because the warrior is on the same side. And I matched the warrior from the elder. 15:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the //elder//. Not the apprentice.

Reduce the size of the patches, and increase the number. Breeze whisker  19:14, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little? 19:35 Sun Jun 10

Define the shading. 19:25, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (W) - Tweaked
Needed to be browner; OA of the most recent version was me. 02:28, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely as always, Loon~ Define his scars abit, can't really see them. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 03:08, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:31, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less... pinkish, now that the base color has changed. 02:41, 11, 06, 2012

Can you blur the tail and neck shading while your at it? Skt Spoilers... 22:36, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - Redone
Redone for many reasons, including blotchy shading, over-blurring of the grey, and such. I copied and pasted the shading from Patchpelt's warrior, so I'd rather not touch it unless absolutely necessary. I did the same with the size, position, and blurriness of of ear pink. I'm not a huge fan of how I did the scar. Comments? Breeze whisker  19:10, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case, since it won't show for me, change are here. Breeze whisker  19:12, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful <3. Define the earpink and lighten the back shading a bit. 20:13, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I defined the earpink, but unless there's a secondary light scource, or he's actually in an environment where there would be backlighting, I don't believe the back would be any lighter. Breeze whisker  22:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar just a bit? This is lovely~ 22:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  22:39, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

'Tis lovely. Blur the shading on the paws and the arms. 02:27, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  15:51, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (A) - Tweaked
Just slapped another layer of shading on. Comments? 16:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Waste... waste everywhere. 19:27, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see any waste.-- 20:14, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste there. >.>

Re-uploaded 00:34, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Whitefang (W) ~ Tweaked
OA is me. (not Minnow, since their image was //never// used, and I was told I could claim it) I made the epical tail more realistic, and changed the shade of brown/tweaked the shading.

<333333 Lighten the midriff shading a tiny bit. Wonderful as always! 20:11, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Lovely<3 21:37, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading a bit. Beautiful. <3 23:09, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.


 * Leafy has returned* Hmm blur the shading a bit., 17:30,June 12,2012 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Alt. Q) - Redone
She was redone because her pelt color didn't match her other images, she was seen just without stripes, so she should be the same color etc, just without stripes. Also, her eye color and ear pink didn't match, and her shading was hard to see. 13:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Whitefang (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Purplemoon, and the tail stripes were unnatural. I also changed the ear pink and eye colors, as they didn't match the warrior.