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Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3  03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.) 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. 12:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink and blur them higlights. x3  21:24, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste below the stomach. 21:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tear the ear. 03:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots more. 18:24, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... I'm gonna have a huge quitter moment but a) I hate this image, b) my blur tool won't blur the shading anymore, c) this'll take me much longer then the two week timespan d) I hate this image! So I'm withdrawing this. Anyone who wants this may have it. 23:55, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this. :3 02:12, 28, 04, 2012

Make the earpink more red. 00:11, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded -  Meh, this is a fail. And Sunnyfrost, if someone has volenteered to take over an image and they haven't uploaded yet, please don't comment. 02:07, 29, 04, 2012

Blur the mid-shading a bit, and get rid of the white specks on the tail and front paw. 04:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add the torn ear. 00:46 Mon Apr 30

Reuploaded -  -dies- Ew this image. Oh and I'll soon fix that black line from the tail to the haunch. x| 05:28, 30, 04, 2012

<3 Darken and blur the shading. 21:13, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :O How can you like it?! D'awww Thanks. I hate the shading on this. >:/ 07:16, 03, 05, 2012

How could you not like this? Blur the belly shading~ 09:55, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt a bit to match her other images. 20:41, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Changes probably aren't showing. :/ Thanks Dazzly and um... I think I blew the shading. o3o 11:25, 04, 05, 2012

Still a tad bit blotchy. Blur it, please.

Reuploaded -  Hope this is okay. My Guassian Blur must have crashed. >8C 06:58, 05, 05, 2012

Blur the belly shading. 21:47, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  -dies- Why did I leave the shading layer locked to transperent pixels? xD >>>.<<< Oh, hope this is better. 04:50, 06, 05, 2012

blur the tail shading ^^;  jack  never let go, loonie ❤  20:02, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading too~ 02:11, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  -thinks this is good- changes might not be showing. 06:31, 07, 05, 2012

Blur the belly shading more please :P 01:29, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the highlights a smidge and define the highlight on the foreleg closest to us. 02:06, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. Also I didn't use highlights on this (OwO) and I didn't really do anything with them, but if I still need to fix them please slap me in the face. x| 10:08, 08, 05, 2012

Blur the tail shading and define the tail shading along the lineart because its edging away when you blur it. Also, enlargement the ear pink a bit? 00:01, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploading -  >8D 09:28, 09, 05, 2012

Define the haunch shading a tad. Skt Like a baws  01:39, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (D) ~ Redone
Okay I know this was origanally supposed to be a tweak, but in chat Cloudy said that if it was impossible to tweak it could be a redo, not sure if this is what she meant but this is how I did it and if you want me to just tweak it then I will. But the shading needed to be fixed, the scars needed to be redone, and the earpink didn't match. The OA was... Scarletwind I think. 19:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a bit. 20:32, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 00:13, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

And define it. ^^ 01:07, 29, 04, 2012

Define the shading. 13:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/shoulder shading a bit more. 09:57, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:11, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink.... 22:09, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights." 00:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. 20:38, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and scars a tad 06:47, 05, 05, 2012

Reuploaded 21:18, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading~ 03:11, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has gone over the two week limit. Declining.

Never mind. I'm sorry... I can't think straight today. You still have a few days left to get this done..

Reuploaded 23:30, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Insaneular (I think), and it needed to match. Comments? 20:09, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken out some stripes. 04:54, 30, 04, 2012

I think it's my browser, but define the earpink some more. 21:47, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded yesterday I forgot to say it yesterday. And the earpink matches the warrior and apprentice, so I won't change it. 01:09, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to thicken out a few stripes to match. 06:33, 01, 05, 2012

Blur the ear pink a tiny bit and there's a bit of waste under him. 23:22, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:54, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his left ear 22:49, May 3, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the shading on the body s tad. Skt Like a baws  23:34, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:06, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

the stripes still look really thin compared to the warrior  jack  never let go, loonie ❤  18:43, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think its fine.. It is on a much smaller blank... Define the ear pink a tiny bit, and blur the belly shading a little. 02:17, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Late upload... heh. 17:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. Breeze whisker  02:04, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) - Redone
I personally like this version better. OA was me, at least the latest one was, and I didnt like the stripes, and it just overall looked bad...Comments?<333 01:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes just a bit. Nice job Twee~ 09:48, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit smaller. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Purty.~ 15:11, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving a bit of a warning, right now...I'm grounded until Wednesday Saturday, so I'll have it up then...just warning... {steps away} 23:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Eh... e3e 17:09, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit larger lol <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  08:35, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the ear pink a tiny bit and blur the pale belly? xux;; 02:23, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! Could be my computers lighting but maybe lighten the shading Just a bit? -- 07:41, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

It's probably your computer. It looks fine to me. 21:02, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:41, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) ~ Tweaked
He needed a fluffy tail :3 Latest OA was Iceheart22. Changes probably aren't showing. I feel it needs to be floofier... 23:56, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it needs to be more floofier and possibly a tad spikier. <span style="">10:30, 02, 05, 2012

Also, make the lineart a bit thicker, if you can keep the floof<3 11:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh my word...I killed his tail ;.;  20:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

some of the floofy parts looks blockisk, make it...less blockish? i don't know how to phrase that owo -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  01:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Those are more likely the spiky parts x3. I'll fix that though. 10:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:03, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Separate the floofiness so it pokes out on the sides and add more spikey bits. :3 <span style="">04:34, 06, 05, 2012

Reuploaded I tried to make one side spiky, and I left the other floofy. 12:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the tail curve more? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  22:04, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the tail less spikey and more floofy? 02:25, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded IT started to become floofy, and then this happened.... 11:27, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

It still needs to match more.. Also try to make the lineart just a tad bit more thick. 21:37, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) - Redone
There were shading issues. OA was Evanphoto, with a redo by Icey and a tweak by DJ. 20:48, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading a tad c: 21:49, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:51, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the neck shading a bit? 11:28, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:56, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

blur the highlight/lighter part on his shoulder. jack never let go, loonie ❤  18:42, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the other shading a bit. Breeze whisker  00:52, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:28, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Timberfur (D) ~ Redone
Needed to match warrior. OA was... LeafstrikeAsakura. Comments? 21:06, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his flank. jack never let go, loonie ❤  18:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and your light source~ 02:20, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:50, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading 02:48, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur (Ki) ~ Redone
OA is Sandstar12 with a redo by Spashpelt, and a tweak by Paleclaw. Redone to match the other images. You may have to go into the file history to see the changes. Comments? 22:10, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add shading to the tail? 22:42, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded But it's faint in a way because I tried to add a good amount of shading but it came out pretty weird..Anyway changes aren't showing. 01:10, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:13, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

This was supposed to be tweaked...It only needed to be lightened. 06:44, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Well....it was put in the redo pile, so I redid it. And Dazzle define the shading where? Or everywhere? 14:29, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Nope It was in the tweak pile... 16:29, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

DX Oh...my bad..DX Do I have to redo/tweak it again? 16:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I guess it's fine to keep it this way... =) Because if you had to do it over again, it would be extra work. Just make sure to check the pile more next time. :P Everybody makes mistakes, and I don't think people should punished for that. 20:46, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Just around the tail and legs~ ;3 22:49, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think the shading should be defined everywhere. It's kind of difficult to see. 23:44, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Aww thanks Stoney! <3 01:16, May 8, 2012 (UTC) ^^

Blur the ear pink in that~> ear and make the ear pink in <~that ear a bit more triangular ;3 02:04, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded DX I'm stupid...I re-uploaded but forgot to say that I did..XD lol 02:09, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (W) - Redone
needed to match elder. Original artist was Darkhallows. Comments? jack never let go, loonie ❤  22:20, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

He needs tufted ears. Please add that. 22:26, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Also, there appears to be a white pixel on the second fur spike (I hope you understand that). 22:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the shading on the paws. 22:54, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

The pixels look sort of uneven on the forehead. 23:12, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it match more by smudging the stripes more? 23:38, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? jack never let go, loonie ❤  00:08, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that shading~ ouo Also, it looks like there isn't any stripes on his front leg farthest from us. Can you add some/make them darker if they're already there? x3 01:24, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Try taking the tufts from the other image. These seem a bit.... big. *can't think of any other word to describe it* XD 08:21, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded better? owo -- jack  never let go, loonie ❤  00:36, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down/Blur ze "highlights" 01:31, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading and lighten the tail shading ouo 01:58, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Also, darken the stripes to match his other images~ 02:11, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Just blur the shading all over. Breeze whisker  03:56, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of teh white pixel in the second tuft of chest fur owo 09:37, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightfall, with a redos by Mintstarr and DJ. (Lemme know if I missed anyone). I'm not changing any of the colors, as they come right from the xcf, which I got from Paleh.

Blur the flank shading a bit. 00:11, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading, too. 01:20, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Small detail, but make the nose pink. Gray cats can have pink noses, and since the apprentice has one already, it should match. 08:21, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading a bit more :3 15:09, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shading's fine, imho.

Define/enlarge the ear pink a tiny bit~ 00:21, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink matches the alt queen, which is fine.

Actually cloudy, I um *cough* had to change the alt queen earpink. Changes aren't showing though. I'll send you the file... 06:26, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Boulder (w) - Redone
Ok, Hope i'm doing this right. my first tweak/redo :3 OA was 17silverthistle. I got the earpink and the grey shades and the eye color straight from the elder (I just made the stripes a bit darker) 06:18, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes darker and lighten up the earpink. <span style="">06:51, 07, 05, 2012

Could you add a pupil, white, and depth to the eye? 08:06, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Just take the earpink from the elder, and the ear's not meant to be dark. It's probably just shading you're seeing on the elder. 08:19, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I just don't have much eye to ad depth too xDD And if I add a pupil I'll have much less, Is it okay if I make they eye a bit bigger? And yes^ I took the earpink from the elder, I will lighten the shading around the ear to define it a bit. -- 08:49, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened the stripes, also fixed the earpink situation (Hopefully) Also, I made his eye a bit bigger, and added more depth/white. If you think I should change it back, I will, But I think it looks better xD -- 09:13, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you get rid of that stripe under his earpink? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  09:29, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading, and rotate the eye depth so its darker on top and lighter on the bottom. Also, you don't need to tell us what you did when you reupload. You can just say 'Reuploaded' ;3 Also, can you make the eye its regular size? It's not impossible to add depth with it normal sized. 15:06, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the eye. Is it even a possibility to make the eyes on the warrior bigger? I only have three pixels to work with, and two when I add the pupil. o.o Also. Does it matter if the xcf file isn't named the same as the png? I have it on RBG xcf and i'm afraid if I rename it I won't be able to access layers since RBG has been the only one I've been able to edit the warrior under. -- 23:29, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to make the eye bigger to color it properly. Look here if your having trouble with it. And it doesn't matter if the .xcf file is named the same. As long as there's .xcf after it, it will have the layers. *if that's what your asking* 00:11, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the shoulder and neck shading. 00:13, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. I have no idea if I missed something here.. But the warrior deputy eye is much bigger than the one that came with this warrior lineart. I literally only have two pixels to work with. that one has seven. I mean, I really don't mind keeping it like this if you guys think it looks good, just weird looking to me. -- 06:25, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Just keep the eye as it is. Darken the stripes a bit more. <span style="">09:52, 08, 05, 2012

It's all right if you want to keep the eye, but what you would do is just color over the eye lineart to make it look bigger. ^^ 22:34, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

xDD Thats what I did, Dazzle. -- 22:42, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

You need to erase the two black pixels on the back of the eye where there's two pixels :p before, you erased the corner pixels which made his eye look really big, but whatever ^^ Blur the shading and ear pink. 00:12, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 21:59, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the stripes better with his other images 02:51, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (KP) ~ Tweaked
I wanted him to match better lol. I think the OA was Paleh (not sure xP) and then a redo by me. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  02:06, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading ouo 02:18, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think I was looking at the wrong version x.e Make his eyes look less derpy, and possibly add more then three shades of green? :3 Also, can you add a highlight/shine to his tag? ^~^ 02:33, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Stonepelt (W) ~ Redone
Changes aren't showing. This had shading issues. Latest OA was Flamingomom3. Honestly, I feel the whole thing needs to match the elder more. If a SW or two thinks so two, I'll redo it. 11:18, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that shading =D <3, and there's waste inbetween the legs. o3o 20:27, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight, rotate the eye depth so its darker on top and lighter on the bottom, thin out some of the stiipes, and makes the ear pink less lop-sided. 00:07, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a little? Breeze whisker  00:48, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes sharper and smudge the tail stripes? 21:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

So, does anyone think I should redo this to match the warrior? I striked it out to make it seem somewhat hidden x3. 22:31, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

I have no issue with you redoing it.

Bramblestar (W) ~ Tweaked
Woohoo! OA was a very smexy person trololol Comments? 00:04 Wed May 9

Blur the pale chest/neck~ 00:15, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:23 Wed May 9

Extend the pale chest more to match the deputy 01:36, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:42 Wed May 9

Snowy (Q) ~ Tweaked
Snowy! I pretty much needed to add shading to it...Comments? Changes may not be showing. 00:09, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading 00:13, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

I've said many times; I use dark shading, and I prefer it because it gives images a better sense of depth...I think it's artist's choice...So I'm not changing it. 00:27, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

You might extend the highlights, since she looks kinda grey. Or you can tint shading blue or something. Breeze whisker  00:43, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:48, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow. Comments? 01:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, define the highlight on the shoulder, and there's some blurred lineart/waste on the tail and in the ear :3 01:43, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. <span style="">09:05, 09, 05, 2012

Fallowtail (Q) ~ Declined
OA was Nightfall and it needed to be redone because it didn't really look light brown, and shading issues. Comments? :3  21:37, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading a bit. 22:42, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Misty, when Paleh nominated these images, she said she wanted to work on them...

Indeed I did. I had first dibs on this image, and it hasn't been anywhere near a week, so I had plenty of time to reserve it. And since I did call it, I believe this'll be declined. 23:13, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it will be. Guys, please check the archives first. x.x

Larchkit (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Changes may not be showing. OA was Blackclaw09 with a redo by me.

Fallowtail (E) - Redone
Needed to be light brown, not golden. OA was Loudsplash, and Teldy. Comments? 23:27, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

This is still pretty golden-looking. You might desaturate it a little. Breeze whisker  02:02, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I don't think this needed to be redone even though that it was on the list...It was just a color tweak-the previous version just had the wrong hue, not messy shading or something like that. 02:35, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Meeeep owo *kicks self* I should be studying but bleh. OA was me. Shelly and Ivy both left so... Comments? 23:28 Wed May 9

Bleh changes aren't showing. It's right here. 23:39 Wed May 9

Re-uploaded Didn't look mottled to me :/ Changes are here 00:15 Thu May 10

Hey, since I nominated this, I'd like to have a hand in how she looks. So, could you please add some more colors, specifically some orange? Google pale tortoiseshell cat, what you find is mostly this (I know it's a torbie, just ignore the stripes for now). 00:24, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm mighty proud of this *u* 03:03 Thu May 10

Rowanstar (Le) - Redone
OA was Bramble, tweak by Iceheart and a redo by Leafstorm. Pattern wasn't realistic. Comments? 03:49, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

You do black and brown cats better lawl. I think there's waste by his butt area. XP <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  03:51, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

The spots look more golden than brown. And the ones on the chest need to be blurred. Also, they look a bit paintbrush-y, maybe smudge them a bit to make them less uniform and round? 05:55, May 10, 2012 (UTC)