Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 99

Tansypaw (A) ~ Approved
I love cream colored cats :3 Comments? 00:35, January 29, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, blur the shading a bit more on the back, and mudge the pelt into the ear-pink on this --> side 00:39, January 29, 2013 (UTC)

Actually, the shading on the haunch needs to be blurred more as well. I would also suggest tinting the shading with some warm color, such as red, orange, or brown. Upload whichever one has the most pleasing result. 00:41, January 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I liked brown the best, so that's the one that's on here. Grr, pixlr, y u blur badly. Changes appear to be not showing 00:14, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

They're showing now, and this looks much better. Blur the haunch shading a bit.

Reuploaded 00:31, February 1, 2013 (UTC)

Define the leg and tail shading. 00:27, February 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:50, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

No comments on this for a while, CBA? Nice work, Silver! 01:46, February 9, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.

Daisytail (St) ~ Approved
Right-o, if you guys can find a more realistic looking cat that is pale brown with dark ginger patches, by all means, please show me a picture, because I can't find one. This is a realistic as I can make at the moment with what I have to work with. 04:53, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Considering the other images are being redone for not being realistic, this honestly isn't all that much better... Perhaps something similar to a brindled dark tortie, except slighty more patchy? And also the base doesn't look very light brown, it looks more like a creamy color.. Darken and saturate it just a bit? 05:43, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. After talking to Kit about the description and being told that both of the designs I've come up with so far are in fact realistic, and basically chocolate calicos without white, and I'm not adding white because that would deviate from the description which I'm not willing to do, I've decided to go back to my first design. And I'm not changing the base color. It's tan, which is light brown. 21:04, February 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * Explainging my POV on the spotty one: Looks like a Red & Cinnamon spotted tabbies can come out looking brownish, which is what the first version uploaded looked like to me. I think this second one just needs to have the fur directionality adjusted and it will be very close to the descrption and look like a Chocolate Tortie. 21:10, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh about the base; it looks like cream. It's not dark or saturated enough for even tan. I think this is what you're going for and that that is more of a light brown than this color and would make a much more realistic pattern. Although I thought were were going for a tortie or torbie that looks more like this, not the cream and ginger tabby we have now. 21:45, February 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * A torbie would require mixing in colors I'm not willing to mix in, as I'm sticking as close as I can to the description. 21:50, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

As you shouldn't. Two colors only. But I am sticking to what I think about the base being too creamy. 21:51, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Fine, if you guys wanted it so badly, here. Re-uploaded. Picked this tan right off of Google. I still prefer the old color, since it went with the ginger better and was also a shade of light brown, but if you guys insist I guess I have no choice in the matter. 22:00, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

This is even more creamy honestly.... pleasedon'tshootme 23:00, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

This is tan. By definition. Tan. I can't help that they look alike. Can I please just switch back to the old color, because either way it's light brown. Tan. Cream. I'm not using the color from the old images or anything close to it because it's just base brown to me, not light brown. 23:20, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

I'm going to get shot, but I seriously don't think this is light brown. It seems more like a darker cream-ish color, which, I know for a fact that's not light brown. Nowhere did anyone say that you needed to use the colors from the older image, and I think artist's choice and rejection of critique only goes so far, especially when multiple members are saying the same thing.

Gee thanks for putting down my color choices. =.= That is actually light brown on the queen, and I wasn't suggested you used it. There was no need to say that. >.> And fine whatever, go back to the old color, but if more people tell you to change it, it's not my fault. And I really appreciate you snapping at my color choices on the queen. .-. 23:43, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm inclined to agree with Skye and Paleh here on colors. This looks like a dark cream...compare it with Daisy's queen. Use Nettlesplash for a color idea, just to get you started...you can lighten it from there, but not to this extreme. 02:43, February 5, 2013 (UTC)

Going with the definition of the word Tan and Cream are essentially a very light brown. The image dosen't put a definition on /how light/ that brown is. Shelly's making an artistic decision for the character (to use a light color). The original image is a Sepia brown, definetly not (IMO) a light one. Unless you have an actual reason you can cite from the books, Shelly's color choice is perfectly valid. Nettlesplash should be nominated for a tweak. It's a decidedly medium brown on that image. There must be something wrong with the color corrections on your monior (to give you numbers, when I colorpick the medium color on the Nettlesplash image [non-highlight or lowlight], it comes out 39% black). You guys are trying to force Shelly into making a /bad choice/ of color based on the description. 16:52, February 5, 2013 (UTC)

We're not asking her to make it the same color as the old image, we're just asking her to darken the brown because this looks like yellow or cream and makes her look like a ginger and cream tabby, which Daisytail is definitely not. She is light brown, which I'm pretty certain is "from the books." She's allowed to have an artistic license, but when four users think that it's off you'd think that, guess what, it's off. Next thing you know, you'll be allowed to have a white cat for a light brown or a black cat for a dark brown because "The image doesn't put a definition" on it. While this may be for many purposes a "brown" we shouldn't make an image yellow or cream if it is not specifically described as such and instead use a more neutral color that could be more widely considered light brown by all definitions. Although Nettlesplash sin't really a good example, Leafpool or Robinwing is more of a light brown. 21:25, February 5, 2013 (UTC)


 * In the end I can only give my opinion. Nettlesplash is a terrible example. But I would consider Leafpool's undercoat to be a very dark take on "light brown". Robinwing is also on the darker end of light brown. While I'll step aside in the name of consensus, that does not change my opinion that this is a nitpick change that seeks only to homogenize the art down to a single shade being applied to a phrase that encompasses a broad range of colors. Given that Ginger patches on light brown is description wise fully a match to a ginger and cream tabby I still see no issues on that front. In the end, though, consensus does win. 03:07, February 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enough of this. If you guys are so hellbent on not letting me choose my own shade of light brown, here you go. I'm not going one shade darker. Now, anything else? 00:41, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

I'm gonna get shot for this but This is really gray now. It didn't need to be darkened this much, we said just a bit, and to make it more orange, not more gray. It was just really yellow. Please don't shoot me ;-; 02:06, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Personally? I think it looks fine. There's a bit of waste by her left paw 02:41, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Waste? You sure? Because I make my chararts using fuzzy select, waste doesn't happen unless the lineart itself has a stay pixel. And Paleclaw, I darkened it a single shade and the yellow balance is exactly what it was before. There is literally nothing else I can do to appease you, and I'm done trying. At this point, just stop please. 04:47, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Yeppers. There's waste exactly where Ivy says. I see it too.

There isn't any for me. O.o 04:54, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Righto, I found it. Someone should probably fix the line art, it's smudged right there. 04:55, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 08:00, February 9, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.

Oakheart (Star) ~ Approved
Not sure if changes are showing or not. If you check the history of the image, and something shows that wasn't Beeb's last version, it's probably mine. xD Comments? 22:57, February 5, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the face, shoulder, and paws dearie~ 23:50, February 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a wee bit 06:58, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just ended up redoing the shading. ack solids are hard Dx 19:13, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? :3 08:04, February 9, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.