Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

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Apple Blossom (A) ~ For Approval
Wow, her pattern's hard to match. I really like how Wrenflight turned out, so I'm doing another sharp shading style. Comments? 03:22, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:24, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:29, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

make the stripes flow more with the body shape. For example, the stripe on her front leg is just a straight line across when it should be curved.

Proud of you on how many images you got done^ Maybe ask Snowed for her warrior or kit 07:50, 6/29/2017

I'd gladly give Shy the file, but keep in mind that I only use Photoshop and have no way to convert .psd files to anything else.

Maybe give her the hex codes for the textures and colors prehaps? They seem a bit off. 10:40, 6/29/2017

Actually, no, they really don't. They're not really all that far off and considering Shy and I shade differently, I'd say the colors match well enough. The only two things that really don't here are the stripes and the unsmudged white.

Expand the white on the chest a little bit? I feel like we would see more of the chest at this angle than on the warrior. 13:56, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded my email isn't the fastest thing to load too, so... 17:25, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

You're doing such a good job with your characters, Shy! This is one of your best ones so far. Anyways, define the lighting on -> leg closest to us? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 20:36, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 20:43, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Soften the stripes a tad 11:14, 6/30/2017

I think the stripes should be thinner on ---> front leg? 13:19, June 30, 2017 (UTC)

Shy, if you'd like (and if you don't mind waiting until Saturday), I would be more than willing to make you a guide of sorts as to what the stripes would look like using her other images. If you'd rather do it yourself, that's totally fine. I know her pattern isn't the easiest thing on the earth.

Reuploaded If you can that would really help, thanks. :) 22:36, June 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again 04:10, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the face and chest a tad? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:17, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:43, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

The shading cuts off really sharp on the > eartip - can you cover that with shading, or smooth it out? :)

Reuploaded :) 02:39, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I have a bit of a problem... my laptop, where the files for this set were, decided to take a dump and for some reason, I lost half of my files in the folder where I kept this. =/ I'm sorry about that. Maybe just add an extra stripe to the elbow/arm and blur or smudge these ones a bit. They match fairly well, honestly.

Reuploaded That's fine, computers do that a lot especially if they're refurbished. :P 17:24, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

Thin the tail stripes a bit

Also maybe reduce white around eyes, I don't think they go up that far on either of the other images

Reuploaded 19:07, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin stripes more and reduce white around eyes, it looks the same

Reuploaded 23:54, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on both farthest legs, and define the shading depth on the chest area?

Reuploaded 00:11, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste on the > side of the tail

Reuploaded 22:04, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Try and maybe tweak the stripe placement on the haunch slightly - on the warrior, which has the same side, it has one that's kinda like a < symbol, then it has ones that split/break apart on the other side, whereas this image just has three going across

Reuploaded 23:40, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (WC) (Star) - For Approval
Why the hell isn't the image showing up..? Well this was fun to do. 16:10 Sun Jul 2

Here he is. Since the image isn't showing up. 16:15 Sun Jul 2

Wikia's being a butt with images. Also, is it just me, or do his images look... more yellow than creamy brown?

I noticed that while I was working on it. There's a highlight, but the colors are more like a pale ginger. Want me to put the elder up for a tweak and adjust the colors? 16:21 Sun Jul 2

If you wouldn't mind, I would greatly appreciate it. It wouldn't be fair to you if all of your comments on this image are about the coloring when all you're doing is trying to match another image. =P

Changes Here Let me know if I need to wait for the elder to be tweaked first and I'll revert the colors back. 16:46 Sun Jul 2

Yeah, you'll have to wait, especially because there's a chance that it couldn't pass, and I think since Berry would be tweaking it, you should let her decide on the colors.

Polly (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay so I didn't know I even had Photoshop, and then Snowed gave me the file, and I have zero idea how to get the colors so oopsies. wow that's a looooot of layers snowed how do you even keep track

idk man I just do. it must be magic. also, define the texture.

re-up changes if needed.

Stripes look thicker/more dense on kittypet, and thin out the M on the forehead a little

So, what do you want me to do about the stripe issue? keep in mind that this is a kit image, so stripes are obviously going to be thinner and smaller. Also, seeing as these blanks are in different positions. . . you get the point. Not asking for a second opinion. . . just asking Snowfall to clarify.

Know you're not asking for another opinion, but I know these blanks are a pain in the ass to match designs with, and sometimes you gotta cram tons of stripes into one place. I think it's fine.

The only reason I even mentioned the stripes was because on the kittypet there's more dark brown than light brown showing but I get that it's a small blank and a different angle. Though I still think the M should be more thin if you can make it that, and smooth out the top -> side of the M as well. Lastly, define shading depth a tad?

re-up I'm hesitant to do this, because I don't want it to be too red.

The "M" stripe on the kittypet image has a much more defined shape and is less curved, if that makes sense? Nice image. 18:42, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes should be smudged a bit.

re-up thanks

maybe smudge out the stripes a lil' more, just to give that rougher effect that the KP has

re-up

Snail Shell (A) ~ For Approval
I really am proud of this, hope you like it. PepperPiper11 (talk) 18:24, July 5, 2017 (UTC) This is great, Pepper. Define the shading and shading depth. 18:30, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some smaller speckles, kind of like the kit has? This is beautiful.

Smooth out the shading on the furthest hind leg? 18:41, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Purdy! Add some shading to <-- ear and define the earpink in --> ear? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 18:43, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks everyone! PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:07, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think the colors are off a little, because when I was making the warrior, Skye told me that the kit is based off Ashfur's colors

Reuploaded  I did use highlights, that might be the reason why, but I did colorpick the colors again. ^^ PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:28, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

You did a good job for your first image! Define the earpink in the -> ear. Any chance I could get a picture of the image of the image without the highlights? If the white are the highlights, then I would say tone them down a little bit. 19:47, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to match the kit's. I also suggest colorpicking from the kit, as it is the first one in the set. :) This is really good, Pepper, you've got a lot of artistic talent, considering this is your first charart. 20:11, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, as it looks like it's throwing off the coloring. The kit is the first one in this set, as Shypaw said.

Reuploaded Thanks, Shypaw! I colorpicked from the kit, and deleted the highlights. PepperPiper11 (talk) 13:46, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the spots look a little too big, and try smudging them

Reuploaded 15:40, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch a little bit? 18:48, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

SNAILS anyway you should try and soften the spots and make them more round (they look too pointy rn) to match the other images. in addition, i think there are also less spots on the other images :] 00:43, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

on his other images it looks like there are more very faint speckles throughout his pelt. maybe smooth the shading on the hind leg closest to us. 17:20, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

This can be for approval now because it meets that guideline :)

Reuploaded Thx Spooky! 00:18, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (Ki) - For Approval
Hi! This is my first charat for an actual canon cat. This is only my fourth charart ever so it's probally not so good. Also, could someone add me to the  character art project as a kit? I'm exited for feedback! Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:37, July 6, 2017 (UTC)



Removed alignment. To upload click on a red link with the correct name. Click on "Choose File" and select the image from your device, it should appear on the ---> side of the screen. At the bottom of the page, click on "Upload File" and your done. :) 21:53, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks! Where you explaining to me how to allign the image? And is it good to add to to wiki page?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 22:08, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I was explaining how to upload your charart. Alignments aren't allowed, and I just told you that I removed the alignment that was there. 22:12, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart (it doesn't touch the line art in some places), define the tail and leg shading,smooth the ear pink.

Also, since this is your first charart, the header should be "For Evaluation"

Thanks! I'll be sure to do that. Where should I post the edited one, in tweaks?

Nope, you reupload it onto the same image here. Also, the file needs to be renamed to Stoneclaw.kit.png. Lastly, don't forget your signature.

Alright I fixed it. I just just uploaded on a new file. I could not figure out how to upload the charart sorry!

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:18, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

This is still named incorrectly. Define light on the legs on back paw? 23:37, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

How do you rename the image? I swer i named it correctly...

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

p.s can I be added to the project?

It takes a bit before your join request gets approved. For now on, just upload over File:Stoneclaw.kit.png. 23:41, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Alright I reuploaded the corrected image in File:Stoneclaw.kit.png is it finished?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:55, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The base color looks a tad darker than the other images, and define light on legs more. This is a nice image. :) 00:04, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I tried lighnting it up a bit, but it always looks darker on the website. I also ligntend up the leggies too. Sould I lighten him up more? The thing I'm concerened about is that it does not look really like fur. But his other sprites were like ths. How do you make it look like fur anyway?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 00:59, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the -> leg and smooth the shading on the <- leg? 01:05, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth. Usually to make it look like fur, the artist uses texture. But since his other images don't, you don't have to worry about that. 02:02, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I fixed it! I think the chest light is too bright. Is this ok? And is it blurred well enough?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 02:37, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light a little on the legs. 12:41, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I defined the light and blurred the chest a little bit. Should I efine the shadows cause the cat's other version are like that. Is it ready?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 13:42, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

maybe define the shading depth just a tad. 17:18, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I defined the shading.

Bananablue42903 (talk) 19:18, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it's too dark. Patch said the shading depth, which is where the shading is gradient, going from light to dark. :) 20:05, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth? ErmineGlow (talk) 20:09, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

What do you mean by that?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:10, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

This can be for approval now because it meets that guideline :) And eye depth means making the difference between eye colors different, so instead of it being a flat color, it's a gradient. I'd also say define the light that's on the < side of the flank and define the light on the tail tip

I added eye defination and I defined the light on the flank and the tail tip. Is it ready? Anyone?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 00:45, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Should I upload this to the wiki? Who approves it?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 01:30, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

To answer, it's already uploaded to the wiki^ A lead of the project will come and CBA then approve it when it is ready. (and you're only technically supposed to poke everyone for comments if a full 5 days goes by, by the way). But for the image itself, define the shading depth on the front legs and smooth the chest shading out

I tried to fix it by smuding the light on the chest and I tried to define the shading on the legs. I'm not sure if I did it well. And what does CBA mean again?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 15:39, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs, back paw, and tail. CBA stands for 'Comments Before Approval'

The base color looks too light, the eyes look kind of grayish, and the earpink looks too dark. The shading is leaking on the tail, front legs, belly, and on the side near the back paw

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Wiki Activity isn't working ATM so let me upload it one sec 20:52, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

EDIT: Uploaded. Went for sharp shading. 20:54, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart around the left edge of the front back leg w o l l o w   -  m a j e s t i c  s i g   21:14, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:45, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

It's still leaking

It also may be my eyes but I think it is also leaking on the lineart of the back as well, closer to the tailbone. 07:44, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

The eyes also look kind of greenish, they should be amber

There's some waste on the ---> side of the back leg farthest from us. The tint looks pretty on this. :) 23:44, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:25, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the face shading a little?

Reuploaded 05:31, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

with this light source, there wouldn't be any light on the stomach area, as it would be blocked by the haunch (what a weird position this cat is in...). so could you fill up the light on the stomach with shading? 06:00, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

Eyes still look more green than amber

As long as the eyes are color picked, isn't it fine? Unless the warrior's eyes are greenish too, then *shrug*

Reuploaded I only left the tiniest, barely noticeable smidgen of light stomach. I did use this source on another image and it was fine, but... Also, I color picked the eyes, brightened and warmed them to amber, and they do not look green at /all/ to me. I'm not saying it's fine, but if Danny agrees, I'll keep it as is. If nayone else thinks they should change, I will do it. I personally think people have been getting a bit pickier lately (especially with no chararts to do :. 07:29, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

It's not being picky to point out that the eyes are the wrong color.... though I suppose it could be my screen. The starclan is the first image I believe, so you could colorpick directly from that one and you wouldn't need to brighten or warm the eyes at all and there would be no color issues

Twig (Ro) - For Approval
neat. 21:00, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the texture on the red shoulder patch just a bit? Gosh dang this is much better than my attempt, you certainly did him justice.

re-uploaded. 20:59, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Thistle (TC) (W) - For Approval
I kinda like how this turned out but eh. Here he is

Define the earpink, shading, and light on the shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:43, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Can you specify any areas where the light source looks off? This is just the source from the tutorials

hmm? i dont see an issue with the light source XD 03:06, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Omg, I meant to put on the tail shading-ish. Im sorry if I confused ya'll. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:16, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

reups I just put the ear pink above the shading, and about the tail, I tried, but the dorsal stripe really hates cooperating with the shading, so it might look like the entire tail has shading on it. *shrugs*

Idk if it's the shading tint or my screen or something, but this looks more orange-y than the other images, and the stripes on the kit look very smudged out/blurred, while these look sharp. Can you also define the stripes on the tail a bit?

reups Idk, I guess it's your screen or the tint, because I tried colorpicking from multiple spots on both the es and kit, and they all gave me this color or a color literally half a shade off. Also, after this, can I stop touching the tail? The dorsal stripe makes it look entirely convered in shading, and the rest of the stripes are covered in shading, and with the tail so thin, idk what to do about it.

I thought I would make this to show the color differences between the base, pale parts, and the stripes. Your base color looks too dark, stripes and pale parts have a warmer tone and the pale parts look too bright. About the tail, couldn't you get rid of the dorsal stripe then? I don't think either of the other images have dorsal stripes on the tail, and it's still hard to make out the other tail stripes

I can't get rid of the dorsal stripe because the other images do have it :/ I'm awaiting the file for the kit from sorrel, so soon I'll have the right colors.

reups Thanks for the color comparison, it did help.

Falcon Swoop (K) ~ For Approval
Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 04:31, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the neck shading, if there is any.

Smudge stripes a bit if you can

Flower (Ro) (K) ~ For Approval
eh

There should be a ginger patch on <- side of the muzzle. I also think the texture should either be smoothed a little or the opacity should be lower, and I don't know the rules about collars so I may be wrong but shouldn't she have a collar since she was born a kittypet?

Tumblekit (Star) ~ Declined
I need to edit the shading a bit but I'll post this anyways

No proof he died as a kit. Declining. idk who keeps adding this, but they need to stop. I have said this time and time again; he has no cite for his name, he could have been a new apprentice for all we know.