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Luna (KP) ~ For Approval
23:01, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Great job on the eye color and pelt markings! I can find no fault/NTI in this! Amazing!TawnyBracken (talk) 02:02, December 27, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Tawny, please only comment critiques about the artwork. You can't just say "nice job" and leave. Anyway, the brown looks too black on the face. Or maybe that's just shading. Either way, can you please lighten it? 02:07, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Tawny 17:30, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job! Is there meant to be earpink on the --> ear? If so, I cannot see it (probably not supposed to O.o) also, the light source of the tail doesn't match the rest of the body.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:36, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks!There aren't earpink there 22:11, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front leg?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:43, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 15:53, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Clovertail (E) ~ For Approval
Wait should I put 'For Approval' since my first one got approved? 02:40, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah you can. And, the white isn't supposed to be on the chest at all - only on the legs. Her other images were tweaked for that awhile back, actually. Nice image^^

'''Redone. '''Thanks! 02:59, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 03:19, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

'''Redone. 03:22, December 28, 2016 (UTC)'''

The shadin on the back hip looks (for the lack of a better word) odd...it basically makes the tail look bigger than it really is. If that makes sense. 04:02, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 04:05, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

The shading all around is very blotchy and flat. Maybe add a second layer, and name it something (Appledash never names her layers, but I name all of them myself, usually use something like “shading2” or “depth”) and go over the parts that are darker? Try looking at some other chararts too. --

Redone I added two more layers of shading. And smudged it so it looks like fur. :) 04:26, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the white some more.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:45, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 02:32, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink a little?

'''Redone. ''' 00:36, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly make the shading a bit less patchy?^^

Redone. There it goes. :) 16:13, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like for the shading placement you have here, there needs to be shading on the chest, like how it is on Frostfur's elder image, which I think best fits the pattern you are trying to replicate. ^^ 03:59, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. '''I am not good at doing my own shading placement, so I usually copy off the apprentice tutorial shading tutorial. ^^ 22:22, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

There's nothing wrong with that. ^^ But it's always good to experiment and create your own style. Maybe not right now, but maybe when you're more confident of your abilities. Anyway, darken the shading. 22:46, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 22:52, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more, I can't really see it. I also think the earpink could use a bit of definition, too. 00:54, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 20:10, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you curve the neck of the shading? 03:47, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 11:25, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Some of the white looks a little pinkish. Sorry if it's supposed to be like that. :3 Shypaw11 (talk) 21:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Cloudmist (Lo) ~ For Evaluation
First charart! Hopefully this goes well. The turtorials were really useful. Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job for your first one! Smudge the shading and lighten it a bit though. 04:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded (thank you! :) ) - Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:06, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if you're aware, but her base on the apprentice image is pure white. I can't tell because the brightness on my desktop is lowered right now.

There are some sharp white pixels on the <--- front leg (where it meets the rest of the body) and on the other front leg towards the shoulder. Probably just missing some shading there. :P 19:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded My screen was at max brightness, but lowered it now and managed to find the white spots. It still looks sorta white to me, but I tried to pale the shading to hopefully make it look less gray if it did. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the image, for instance the belly? — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  14:38, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light a bit on the legs and tail. 00:51, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure about the depth Shadowbright67 (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe just add a touch more depth to the shading, and define the light on the paws again

Carpkit (Star) ~ For Approval
All colors from kit image. Comments? 00:38, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading just a tad, particularly on the main body and tail? 00:50, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:57, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on the front body still looks undefined. Try adding some depth.

Reuploaded. 20:19, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (Lo) - CBA
First loner image. 01:56, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Wavepaw (A) - For Approval
she's waving buh-bye to 2016 too 03:11, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Thank god this terrible year is over. Define the light on the back paws. 02:19, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:38, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear. 03:34, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a little bit? 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Piketooth (Star) ~ For Approval
don't have the file anymore but it's not a complicated pattern so w/e 11:58, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't seem as pink as on the warrior image. It looks nice. :D Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 21:44, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 14:48, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

There are some specks of waste around his tail. - Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  02:14, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 20:08, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) - For Approval
~Patch   feather~   15:18, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just me, but I don't think the tint of the brown matches the other images. It seems a bit too...dark. 01:20, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think there should just be a little more marks with a slight lighter shade so it's a bit like a gradient effect? (what am I even

Re-uploaded I can't tell if it looks any lighter. I used a much lighter brown though. ~Patch   feather~   16:48, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Would you like the file? The pattern doesn't seem to match correctly, as Sunjaw did it a certain way. 14:59, 1/03/2017

Perhaps add more speckles on the underside of the tail, as the other images seem to have a few more there

Re-uploaded Yeah, I think the file might help. ~Patch   feather~   14:22, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (SHA) (A) ~ For Approval
This is a pretty pattern  14:33 Mon Jan 2 

Smudge/Blur the shading a bit more. 18:06, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded this earlier but then didn't actually say anything  23:51 Thu Jan 5 

Cricketkit (Star) ~ For Approval
Completely forgotten how to charart >_>

eyes should be orange. 14:26, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups how did I miss that

Remove the white, as she's only stated to have a white hind leg. 18:04, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Smoothened the chest shading a bit. I thought tabbies are allowed to have white paws/chest/muzzle? Especially when she has some white genes (imnotmakinganysense) but if someone else agrees I'll gladly change it.

I'd agree to removing it as well, as from what I've heard, tabbies can have pale parts added, but adding white is a bit of an assumption for her description

Re-ups Does this work^^

They were never allowed to have extra white, dear. It's always been pale. Now, while it looks white on some images, it's almost always been pale... unless someone lies just to get their images how they want them. The pale as you have it is completely acceptable and I actually really like it.

Duckkit (Star) - For Approval
First original design. ^^ And yes, I did surgically place the short-haired tail onto this one. He's only described with a "straight tail", not a tail like his father, who's described with a "tail like a reed". Comments? 02:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little bit! It looks super cool. :DDD

He looks really greenish-yellow. Can you make him brown?

Reups I was thinking the exact same thing right after I posted it, Jayce. XD Found a different shade that I liked. 02:46, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you shift it just a little bit more? Now he looks slightly orange... but that could also be my screen.

Reups. Yeah, you're right. 02:52, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It's possibly my screen problem or my eyes? But to me it looks like... it has a ginger pelt with greenish stripes?

Reups I could see that for the stripes, but not so much on the pelt color. Probably because I've already changed it three times already in one day. Can I have a second opinion on the pelt color please? 05:09, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I have to agree, it looks more brownish gold than anyting. 05:35, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups You know what they say: fourth--er, fifth time's a charm, right? 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) - For Evaluation
I am a lot happier with this one! I like her eyes. 02:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reup 02:57, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading again please. 03:03, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:12, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the body (sorry that I'm not giving you a break). 03:37, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the <-- side 03:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be darkened - but it's probably the tint. Is the layer on Multiply? Try that if it's not, or change the brightness setting/saturation/contrast setting =)

Reuploaded 04:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste from the above <-- hip all the way to the underside of the tail. 04:42, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:36, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the eye-depth

​Reuploaded 21:50, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darktail (Loner) - For Approval


hahaha i'm not living up to the other artists' great art sorry guys

also ill fix the waste above the back later 03:39, January 6, 2017

Smoothen out the shading 03:40, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It might be me, but I can't really see the earpink. Besides that, nice work! :) Shadowbright67 (talk) 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Blend the shading more, please.  12:14 Fri Jan 6 

Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
16:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)