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Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feet shading still needs to be darkened. 00:26 Tue Nov 15

Oh, and she needs a torn ear as well. 00:34 Tue Nov 15

One thing, with highlights I just really can't use them without having bad shading. I will try to blur the shading, but I hope everyone can understand that highlights are bad for the chararts I make. 03:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I guess it's better now...

Make the ear nick a little thicker. 05:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The paws still need to be darkened. Just to clarify, right now they're lighter than the rest of the legs and that makes pretty much no sense with the current light source (or what appears to be the current light source). They need to match the colour at the top of the legs if not be darker than that. 04:50 Wed Nov 16

Reuploaded. 01:31, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. 08:05, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is a bad charart.. I darkened the shading. 05:21, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit. -- 12:16, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart on the tear please. 22:21, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:22 Sun Nov 20

Brighten the highlights more. They still don't match the other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:08, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I just found out that I can only have 2 images up, I have 3. 00:47, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'd like to take this over. :) I'll go reserve it now and reupload it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tweaked from the original image, not Stone's, but it's still tweaked. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:44, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, blur the tail shading/highlight (if that is a highlight o.o) at the tip just a smidge. Lovely job as always. -- 00:49, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Archeye (W) - Tweaked
I dont know if its redone or tweaked, I redoned stripes and shadings.. OA was Insaneular.. Leaf-storm,14:11,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Ups, changes arent showing Leaf-storm,14:13,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Why is the lineart in between his haunch and his tail gone? 16:08, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That's the old version. 16:21, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

i dont like when changes arent showing Leaf-storm,16:48,November 13,2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list, but could you make the ear-pink less purple. 22:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was on the list Leaf-storm,12:57,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Reupladed, late, sorry I wasn't on my computer before Leaf-storm,13:38,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and shading. 00:21 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded, 15:15,November 15,2011 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be darker, and darken the highlights/shading on the haunch or brighten the highlights/lighten the shading on the shoulder. Blur the stripes as well. 04:52 Wed Nov 16

Also dull the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:39, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste in the triangle where the haunch and the paws are separated. Also, near the front paws. 21:34, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,10:12,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more red than purple, and sharpen the edges of the stripes by smudging them. 23:59 Fri Nov 18

Changes arent showing ,7:07,November 19,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the front paws. 22:02, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 05:19 Sun Nov 20

Reuloaded, changes arent showing, whats with it??? ,12:01,November 20,2011 (UTC)

Too many files on the wiki, too many people (re)uploading. It happens, move the lighter shading of the chest, higher up so it's on his chest rather than on his belly. Love this! 16:18, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,12:52,November 22,2011 (UTC)

The front leg is starting to look pixelated (sp?) right near the lineart. There's a few pixels there that are lighter than they should be. Could you try and fix it? I couldn't begin to suggest how though.... 18:50, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

My mistake, sorry fixed now ,15:00,November 23,2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) - Tweaked
Blurred shadings and added some more, OA is Bramble Leaf-storm,14:53,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the shading on her paws. 16:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:30,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the neck shading and lighten the shading on the middle of the haunch. Blur all shading. 22:59 Sun Nov 13

Next comment will be blur the shadings more yes? I do it..but I dont have much time now Leaf-storm,13:46,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload the image? Also, try to match the shading to this tutorial about shading 'cause right now the shading doesn't make much sense. 00:18 Tue Nov 15

I make it tomorrow because on this computer I have hight brightness and I cant see the shadings correctly. 19:58,November 15,2011 (UTC)

Free time! Yes! It looks really bad, sorry 10:23,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the stomach to match the haunch shading closer. 00:00 Sat Nov 19

Lighten up the shading oon the paws. Trollsky  She who Trolls everything 07:49, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, forget paw..I made it later..busy now 8:05,November 19,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 9:12,November 19,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the color of the paws. 19:51, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading. 23:44, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:55,November 22,2011 (UTC)

Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
Added longer tail. Original artist was Sandy, redone by Scarlet. Comments? Elorisa  18:24, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks a little odd... When I added it to the list, I pictured it being expanded at the middle, so that it was roughly the same shape, but longer. Make sense? 18:28, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded; Better? ''' Elorisa   18:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, perfect :) 18:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip of the tail a bit pointier and erase the waste around the tail. <span style="">22:45 Sun Nov 13

Are you still working on this, Elorisa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:06, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

If she's not going to work on it, I'll glady take over. I love playing with the lineart on images. =) 08:09, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it, I just haven't gotten around to reuploading it. I'll have it uploaded either later today or tommorow. -- Elorisa   20:10, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded... -- Elorisa   16:07, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip pointier and the line on the tail closest to the back a bit smoother, it's a bit jagged right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:25, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

The tail sort of looks... broken? Perhaps make it a bit smoother. How? I'm not that sure. -- 00:51, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by 'broken', Splashy? -- Elorisa   01:06, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look.. right. Maybe make the curve bigger at the top. The curve in the tail isn't really in the right place currently. <span style="">03:25 Wed Nov 23

Squirrelfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was hollyberry; redone to be reddish brown. I took all colors from Oakheart, so I am not changing any colors. 00:11, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does the red part of his description mean that he needs stripes? :\ 00:13, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

He's red-brown, which is the same as reddish brown. Oakheart and Pinestar are reddish browna nd they don't need stripes, so I'm not adding stripes. 00:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 02:38, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks the taddest bit blotchy by where the haunch meets the foreleg. 03:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

You may not be changing any colors, but that ear pink needs to be blurred. Misty, this looks much better then the original version. 08:03, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading along his back. 93.97.191.4 18:27, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Derp. Forgot to log-in. 18:29, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. <span style="">00:00 Mon Nov 21

Misty, you still working on this? 18:47, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (W) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be redone, and I accidently erased the earpink so I had to do that along with the shading.. Sorry. Dx OA was Icecloud33. Oh, and according to the new rule do I have to do her kit image along with this one? M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:20, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the shoulder highlight more circular. 21:12, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And lighten the earpink a tad. 21:18, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And no, you don't have to do her kit if you just tweaked the shading on this one. It's only if it's a major change. You're more than welcome to reserve it, though. 03:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, thanks for telling me. ^-^ Hopefully I blurred the shading enough, and I brightened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   03:26, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit more and thicken it on the shoulder a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:51, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is working, I'm new to GIMP... M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:13, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot about the waste.. >.< M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:17, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could use a bit more blurring (gaussian blur) and center the earpink a bit. :3 16:15, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink too. <span style="">23:58 Sun Nov 20

Reuploaded Decided to re-do the shading, didn't really like it here :P This time the earpink stayed xD M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   21:36, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. It looks solid. <span style="">21:50 Mon Nov 21

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:10, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. <span style="">22:12 Mon Nov 21

Is it okay if I withdraw this? I'm just not really interested anymore.. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   23:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, I guess I'll keep it. I hate giving up even on a small project. xD  01:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Beechstar (L) - Tweaked
I just burned it to make it darker and tweaked the eyes 'cause they didn't make sense to me XD <span style="">03:16 Sat Nov 19

OA was Echomist <span style="">03:17 Sat Nov 19

Wow, that was fast :D Perhaps just a little darker? 03:18, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hey, I all I had to do was burn it XD <span style="">03:24 Sat Nov 19

The little strip of fur between the front legs seems odd as in there's no shading or it doesn't match the rest of the pelt. Perhaps darken that little section there. Awesome! 04:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">03:59 Sun Nov 20

Blur between the legs just a little bit :3 22:27, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">02:08 Tue Nov 22

Could you try and dull the highlights? If you don't want to, then that's fine. 18:55, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

If nobody sees a problem with it, I'm just going to redo it. The shading is weird, there's a lot of blurred lineart, and triangle tabbies aren't the most genetically accurate. Speak now or forever hold your peace. <span style="">08:53 Wed Nov 23

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Had to look more like his warrior charart. OA was Insaneular, and I'm guessing it was tweaked later on by Goldenpaw. I got all the colors from his warrior charart. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:30, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little more. 16:50, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done, how does it look? ^-^ M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   17:11, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the stripes a tad? Looks great! 21:36, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink on the right ear. <span style="">22:19 Sun Nov 20

Reuploaded Defined the stripes and the earpink. 01:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes need to be a lot sharper to match the other images. <span style="">03:28 Wed Nov 23

Sandstorm (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Bramble with major tweaks by Elorisa, needed to match her other images. Comments? 18:42, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading/define the shading in the eyes. This is lovely. :3 18:45, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Defined the eye shading. 19:45, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. It looks a little small. <span style="">22:16 Sun Nov 20

The base coat looks a bit greyer than the warrior. Either saturate it, and try ad match best you can, or color pick from a place there's there's not shading on the warrior image, like the top of the muzzle. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:37, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (R)~ Tweaked
It needed tuffed ears. 23:42, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add more "poof" to the brown ear. <span style="">23:48 Sun Nov 20 Tufts. <span style="">00:21 Mon Nov 21

His ear farthest from us(his brown ear)needs to look more tutfed. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 12:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, that's exactly what Sweetflower said. Please refrain from repeating comments ;3 -- 21:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) - Redone
I had permission to re-do this. I re-did the stripes, re-did the shading, and eliminated some blurred lineart that was on the previous image. The OA was Nightshine, and tweaked by me. 04:17, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! However (and I know this is almost nit-picky) but it appears you have three different kind of tabbies going on here, and genetically, that is not possible. 04:31, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

I like the stripes! They looks a bit like speckles on the face though, maybe make them a bit linger and bigger? Also, blur the ones on the body ever so slightly. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:12, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I agree with Ivy. If anything, I'd say make all the stripes look like the ones on his face. <span style="">01:11 Tue Nov 22

Reuploaded. I didn't have time this evening to make him a spotted tabby, so I stuck with wavy. =P 03:24, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewater (W) - Tweaked
Yeah, I know it's smudged. There's no other way I can't make the shading so obvious on a white cat xD Anywho, needed darker, blurred, and thicker shading. OA was Bramble. 21:45, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, I dont see anything wrong othr then darken the shading at the tail base - 21:54, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Try your best to blur the shading/highlights. 08:36, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...why not just re-do it, but follow the exact same style. This needs to be blurred a /lot/. 18:53, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redone, I'll lighten the shading if needed. 20:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Patchpelt (W) - Tweaked
Shading Tweeak. Might have gotton rid of some blurred lineart too, OA= Echoheart - 23:14, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:25, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck. 23:41, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's all blurred to the max. If you guys still think it needs fixing then perhaps someone can help me out with it - 01:11, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Just smudge up and down on the neck. This should fix the shading. 22:49, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Jigsaw (KP) - Redone
I love my rainbow collars :D OA was Insane. 00:03, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be the bearer of bad news...but...I think when they said brown and black tabby, I think they meant he has black tabby stripes, like my cat Nibbles. I'm really sorry...this is wonderful, but I don't think a cat like this is possible. 01:04, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

But, Ivy, based on that, we have to make Ivypool A White cat with silver stripes. Not White with Silver tabby patches. And I think we all would hate that, 'cause Ivypool looks epic. Anyway, tone the highlights down a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:08, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yea and you wouldnt want to go with THAT idea, would you ivy? xD Darken the shading on the patches - 01:10, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:15, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Purdy (E) - Tweaked
Add mottles, and ragged ears. Ugh. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 03:21, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nuuuu this is great, no "ugh" for you! Can you make the fur a tad bit more rumpled? 03:24, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

As in more patches or....kinda like Brokenstar with the raggedy bits? (sorry, I am dumb. x_x) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 03:27, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

You can do that, or have more places like I did with Skywatcher. 03:31, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. EW. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 03:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

OH. and OA is Quietstep. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 03:52, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Swoop (CG) - Redone
OA was Iceheart. Had to be redone to match her queen charart. Took all colors from her queen charart. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:55, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the mud a bit. What I did on the queen image was make the opacity a bit less than 100. Also smudge it too. Looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:37, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:45, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Speckle (Lo) ~ Redone
Wow, it's seems like ages since I last posted a charart... OA was Icethroat and it needed to match her description and queen image. 18:31, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add more flecks on the legs and chest. 18:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the shading & blur it - 19:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:20, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, you sure matched mine well. :o Anyways, this is great! Blur the midsection shading a bit and shrink a few of the bigger specks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:19, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink. 20:27, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:38, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftfoot(MC) - Tweaked
Yea, yea I know about the gray at the bottom. I'll fix that in the next upload - 19:07, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah and OA was Spottedwing - 19:08, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

nevermind, I fixed it - 19:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and the highlights are sorta blotchy. 02:17, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, don't tell Bloo what's wrong. Tell her how to fix it. Also not everyone uses highlights. Don't make the assumption that they do. But yes, Bloo, blur the shading and the earpink some. <span style="">03:32 Wed Nov 23

Silvermask (D) ~ Tweaked
Shading tweak. I also changed the colors a bit. 19:30, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

OA is Nightfall, with a tweak by me a few months back. 19:30, November 22, 2011 (UTC)\

Define the unshaded tail part - 19:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

The whole tail has shading, Bloo. There isn't a part without it. I can add it however, if you please. 19:41, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eww. 19:46, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Graymist (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows and it needed to be long-haired. Comments? 20:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose gray and brighten the earpink just a tad. Great job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Flora (Ro) ~ Tweaked
--Patches need to be darker, original artist- Minnowclaw/Swallowtip with shading tweaks by me. 21:29, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudges. This image looks much better now. 21:31, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! :3 01:16, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken all the patches so they all match each other. Cloudy's right; this does look much better ^^ <span style="">03:34 Wed Nov 23

Yellowfang (Ro) - Redone
Is it okay for it to be redone? Original artist was Grayravenpaw, with tweaks by Ivystripe, and it needed to match the other images. Comments? 21:37, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

If it needed to match, of course it could be redone. Darken the shading. 21:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:14, November 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * dies* Crap I wanted to do this! Define the scars, thicken the lineart on the far ear tear, and blur the shading.  00:25, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, sorry. :P 00:36, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the belly shading and blur all of the shading. Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:56, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 02:11, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (MC) - Redone
I can't even really believe that I made this. I talked it over with a few of the leads, and they agreed that she badly needed to be redone, no offense to the OA who was Ashshadow. It was pixily, blurry, blotchy, and I don't even think it had any shading. Also, before you complain about the stripes, Iceheart said it is the artist's choice whether or not to give a tortie stripes. I've never seen it done so I wanted to give it a go. Comments for improvement? =) 03:44, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is fantastic, Ivy! Define/brighten the ear-pink a bit more, define the stripes by her ear, maybe add some to the patch on her muzzle, and define the shading on the herbs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:02, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on the tail a tiny bit, and blur it? It kind of looks like the patches abruptly stopped. This is AMAZING. 06:18, November 23, 2011 (UTC)