Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 14

Dapplepelt (MC) - withdrawn


Well its 11:52 where I am, so its only 8 minutes until we can put up images again, So I thougt: what the heck, tweak weak will be over by the time they see this anyway.

The image: I followed what it said on her description. Although I don't remeber the tabby striped tail... Mossflight 06:59, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I think you should make the tail look more like it has patches, not stripes. Also, blend the patches more.Minnowclaw 13:40, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

umm, i kinda already saved spottedleaf so i could make her sorry.Shim-Shim ★ 15:37, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. If Shimmersong did reserve her then please withdraw this. Can people please start taking note of the reservations? This is the second image I've had to say this to today. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:04, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Shimmersong, I didn't see your reservation. I will just simply turn it into... Redtail. Just have to lose the herbs and change the eye.Mossflight 15:56, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

And blend the patches more. And you will need some black patches for a tortie, and the Redtail image has more redish ginger patches than this. Sorry that I sound harsh; I'm just trying to help. -- Dawnfeather talk! 10:08, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ok I will not change this one. I tried looking for a tortoiseshell medicine cat and I found her (Dapplepelt). Mossflight 15:56, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, you just need to take away the things that are specific to Spottedleaf now, such as the darker eye fur and stripd tail. I'd add more patches and make them more irregularly shaped, blend them together more too. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:14, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Heres the new one. Mossflight 22:38, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

It's great, but I think you should take away the white muzzle, paws, and chest as well because she was never said to have those. And I think that Dapplepelt should be a little more...dappled, if you know what I mean.  Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 22:43, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Mossflight somebody already reserved Dapplepelt.--Stonestar 20:30, September 12, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Fine I will withdraw this. Sorry I didin't see your reservation Eviningshine. Mossflight 20:54, September 12, 2009 (UTC)