Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 262

Littlestep (W) - Approved
I'll smooth the patches more in a bit, I just want to get this up. Been a while since I used SAI so I forgot how my smudge tool works. 21:28, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:47, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think the patches should be smoothed and smudged a bit more. 23:20, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:36, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

the starclan shows a little more white on this side, mainly around the stomach area 03:22 Tue Aug 6

Add a touch more shading depth on the haunch and tail

Reuploaded. Ended up just redoing the black patches. It went wrong when I smudged them originally. 22:30, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe try a 1px smudge tool softer brush

Reuploaded. 19:18, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

The black still appears finely smudged on the other images. 00:32, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Will SAI actually cooperate with me? Maybe. 21:39, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I'm finally on the right track. 23:48, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

See my comment on Perchwing. 02:07, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

the black looks a little gray around the shoulders 06:29 Wed Aug 14

Reuploaded. I just redid the black patches again because it was getting too difficult to manage them. They were getting oversmudged and it was going to be difficult to fix without flat-out redoing. 00:26, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:35, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 14:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Pebble That Rolls Down Mountain (K) - Approved
they see me rolling -- 23:22, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define and perhaps expand the shading. r ♥  ' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through ' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <00:36, 8/13/2019> ​

Reuploaded -- 23:02, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes seems bluer on the other images. 23:23, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded There, they should be blue now. -- 23:48, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:14, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 14:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

One-eye (Alt. W) - Approved
Her eye would still be cloudy and not fully covered with tissue yet, so I made it this way. I'll also fix up the shading more tomorrow. -- 00:12, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Since you'll be fixing it up, add 'darken and define' to that list, if you don't mind. The legs especially could use a bit more shading. ​​​

Reuploaded yes yes I can -- 23:02, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the tail, especially on what I assume to be a pale part? It looks like there isn't any shading there. r ♥  ' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through ' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:37, 8/13/2019> ​

Sorry, but what do you mean Star? -- 23:39, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think Star is referring to the unshaded part on <--- part of the tail. I believe it could be filled in with shading since it seems out of place. 23:22, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for clarifying! -- 23:50, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

could you expand the shading just a little bit on her side/haunch? and maybe add some to the muzzle area, to make it look less flat

Reuploaded -- 00:48, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:15, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 14:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Snowfur (W) - Approved
04:16, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit? ​​

Maybe recede the ear gray just a bit? Malina457 (talk) 23:54, August 13, 2019 (UTC)malina

Re-uploaded 06:02, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps add some more eye depth? 23:23, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:31, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:30, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 14:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (W) - Approved
This should have gone up with my last two, but I was lazy 22:36, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be more stripes on the tail? -- 23:04, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reup 02:12, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have some of the paler sections creep onto the shoulders a bit? Kinda like the deputy, app, and such. 23:25, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reup 01:56, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Nicely done! 12:32, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 14:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (TC) (K) ~ Approved
boing  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 17:39, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the earpink just a touch more and smooth the shading on the haunch 02:05, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 10:58, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:32, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 14:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Nightwing (W) - Approved
She fell off the face of the earth I guess -- 00:27, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the depth on her chest a little bit? or maybe the light, if thats easier?

Reuploaded -- 00:47, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Nicely done! 12:34, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 14:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Ratscar (W) - Approved
Bitey boy 01:58, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:34, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 14:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)