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Pebbleshine (UN) ~ CBA
hey guys, this was hard and my hands must rest but here is my art. all colors picked from the warrior, pattern done from the warrior side. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   08:36, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

This is gorgeous!! Can you lighten/define the face and neck shading and also smooth out the flecks a bit more on her chest? They seem to stop abruptly. —

Maybe add some white flecks on top of the brown ones. This was done with a specific brush originally, and the layers alternate between colored layers on overlay and multiply, and white. 14:01 Fri Dec 14

Alright, several things. One, there's tiny specks of waste floating around the character, two, lower the opacity of the shading on the paws, they are almost gray. Three, you didn't fill in the nose, and four, make the placement of the speckles on the chest more natural. They are a straight line right now. Otherwise than that lovely job!Potato Flakin (talk) 14:19, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it looks completely black on her white fur. I absolutely love the speckles, and you did so well with such a challenging design!! 14:28, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading in the <-- ear and eye, along with by the tail tip.

16:22, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, Could you possibly redline what you mean, Sun? I'm not sure if the white i just added is good enough but yeah. As from what I was seeing the flecks/speckles match the warrior which I believe I'm suppose to be matching that one's pattern. Also the shading is black, Potato when you mention waste can you possibly say where it is instead of just telling me there's waste as it's sometime very hard to spot waste. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:06, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

The speckles on the foreleg closest to us also stop too abruptly as well. On the mentioned leg, it looks more like they got erased and left like that. Not to say that was what occurred, but it is how it appears. If that makes any sense. SquidwardPlays 22:28, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shafing depth.

23:00, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Yes the shading depth is a must, and the waste is outside the chest, back, tail and belly.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:57, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I know the shading depth is a must, Patch already pointes that out. Can you point out where because I don't see it. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    01:04, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I believe Potato is talking about this. SquidwardPlays 01:09, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I think expanding the shading will also help on the main body and hind leg. 02:07, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Please crop the image to the lineart on all sides. ​

I'm not exactly sure how to crop. Should I be croppinv the image if its fhe size from the wikis lineart? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   09:53, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not asking you to remove any of the lineart... it's just excess space that doesn't need to be there. I'm not asking you to distort your image or anything. =/ ​

How would I crop it? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   17:08, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

There may be a arrow or something that allows you to shrink the border. Do you use GIMP? There is a cropping tool shaped like a square. There is some empty background that Jayce wants you to crop a little bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 17:16, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Patch told me how, I'll upload soon. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:12, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, will fix the stomach and facial shading soon. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   20:55, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, fixed the rest of the shading had to remove some waste I forgot on the last upload. Oops. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   21:09, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Can you fix the arm speckles that I mentioned? It seems like you didn't change it at all or took into mind what I said. SquidwardPlays 22:03, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

I must have read over the comment, my bad man. I'll fix it soon. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:05, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste outside the chest, back and tail. Bringing this up because I think you forgot about it.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:44, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

I removed it before as far as I could see, and pointing it out when a lot can't see it is a little nitpicky. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:47, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

It can be hard to see, but it's there here, here, and here. May as well nab it when you're uploading next imo 22:52, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I got both this time. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:40, December 18, 2018 (UTC)        

Almost, there's still waste on the tail, my apologies for being so nitpicky! (The waste is near the base of the tail).Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Err... I don't see anymore waste unless you consider this it? Potato, when telling people about waste, adding a picture and circling it out for people can help them a lot more than just pointing it out. If you take the image and change the background in an art program you're likely to see it. —

Could you smooth out the shading on -> front arm, and perhaps add a couple more speckles/flecks/brown spots so it doesn't look so straight down the arm? It basically goes on par with the shading down that arm and it's a bit disorienting. There's also a darker line of flecks on the tail that seem a tad out of place. Perhaps add some white flecks/spots there to break that up a bit? ​​​​

That darker flecks is how it appeared on the warrior, I was doi g my best to match that since it showed quite a bit of this side of the body. Am I removing most of them or just a little bit of the flecks there? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   17:18, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

I get what side you're matching, but I think the brown still needs to be broken up a bit. It's not quite that overrun by brown flecks on her other images. There's still a lot of white on that tail. ​​​​

The shading feels a bit off. I redlined a basis that should be followed with your light source, and I recommend lowering the opacity or changing to a different colour because the black looks super stark on her white and brown pelt >: —

Re-Ups —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   06:07, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the flecks on her -> front leg? —

Should be less speckles on the chest, on the set they appear to gradually fade out to none the further to the center of the chest you get, which on this blank would be the bottom and < sides 23:29, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, hopefully the chest on this is better. I was earlier told to add more flecks so.. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   23:43, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

The speckles on the front limb closest to us are still very disorienting since it looks like they end with the shading. Maybe try extending the speckles to just outside the shading limit, keeping the size, pattern, and opacity of the speckles already there? Throughout the entire limb. Right now the border between the white and the speckles is looking very stark. 06:14, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   07:36, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think the speckles end a tad too abruptly still at that spot just at the top of the leg where they cut off, and also on the face. Could you make it so they fade out a bit more before going to white? 18:50, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

can you add shading on the left side of the face? the tuffs of fur would add some shadow there. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:13, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

With this light source, the shading would be on --> that side of the face, so it's good.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:22, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

it wouldnt shadow on the face, but on the fur, it overlaps a little, wich would add a shadow. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:48, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think the <-- face is fine, there's isn't suppose to be shading there as that's where the light source is coming from is the left. So I'd rather not change it, gonna have to ask for a second opinion here. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   21:58, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Shading between fur...flaps is artist's choice, as long as the overall shading placement matches the light source, which it does. 22:40, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   23:57, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

17:04, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry to break CBA, but please smooth the shading out on the tail, and the speckles on the back foot closest to us Edna bit abruptly—please drag those out a bit. :) 17:09, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   06:06, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 23:12, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Yew Tail (W) ~ CBA
All colors from ES image. Comments? 05:24, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

The base colour seems to be leaking onto the tail a bit. —

It's supposed to be there. 05:26, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

I can see where you got it from since it's kinda on the ES, but considering this side matches the hunter's, I think it should be removed. It seems super off putting, especially with the warrior blank's lineart. —

Define the shading on the legs, can you also define the eye depth as well. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   05:35, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Blue is the holder of the master pattern, though. I think she knows what's supposed to be there. If anything, we should be tweaking the hunter to also have that tiny spot. ​​

Could you define the shading depth on the head, ears, and tail? 15:19, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:29, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

My apologies then ^^; Regardless, can you smooth out the shading on the neck and cheek a teensy bit? —

Reuploaded. 22:56, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Can you shrink the brown face patch a bit so it hugs the eye more tightly? It's much wider here than on the ES near the eyes 06:05, December 20, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:03, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 21:07, December 22, 2018 (UTC) sorry for breaking the CBA, but there isnt ment to be brown here. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 08:08, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Owl, it is suppose to be there. it is in the ES too. Silverfur  skz  [ 13:09, 12/23/2018 ]

Nah Owl’s right. The brown on the other images doesn’t reach that high into the haunch. It’s only on the foot. Mind receding that, Blue? 15:23, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:51, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 23:08, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Bone (W) - For Approval
15:40 Fri Dec 21

The scars need to be more reddish. The teeth need to be whitened and the collar looks dull as well. The eye scar should be moved up a little bit, it's higher on the rogue.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:07, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I honestly think the scars and teeth are fine... —

I agree that they look fine. The ear pink could be defined, though. I really love this 20:13, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry if I'm a rotten potato here, but when I looked at the rogue and deputy it doesn't match. Shading is covering the lineart on the most noticeable hind leg, and there needs to be less teeth on the collar.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:54, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think it matches the rogue fine - all the chararts were done by different artists and Sunjaw's style works fine here. ^^ —

If you think you can do better, Potato, then by all means, go ahead. I'll remove a couple teeth, but bone and teeth yellow with exposure to dirt/blood/sunlight, and I will not change the color of them. 21:56 Fri Dec 21

I think it's fine, as Sun said with that exposure they would be yellow. Could you define the shading on the legs please, I'm not seeing any there and I think there would be some on the <-- side of both legs. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:03, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

My only critique would maybe be expanding the convas by a couple pixels on the bottom so his claws aren't cut off as much. ^^ This is absolutely lovely. —

Reuploaded 20:42 Sun Dec 23

Could just be me, but the collar looks like it is to high up, can you lower it down?  Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:44, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

It probably appears that way with the way the blank is, I think it's fine imo. —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 23:52, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Silverstream (Alt Ki) - For Approval
That is shading, not texture btw. Matched the warrior but I can redo the pattern to match the queen if I need to. 15:58 Fri Dec 21

This is lovely, can you darken the leg stripes a bit? I think the stripes may still have to match the queen but I'm not totally sure. 22:34, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think the darkness is sufficient.

I think they're a little lighter than the warrior so maybe darken it a little? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   05:41, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:41 Sun Dec 23

can you define and/or smoothen out the shading on the front right paw?  <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:44, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) ~ For Approval
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22:50, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

The shading seems too dark, though it could just be me/my screen. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:53, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I agree, it could be smooth out on the cheek as well as lightened. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:55, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Agreed. Smooth it out on the legs too. Is there supposed to be shading on the muzzle? If it is smooth it out as well.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

should be some on the belly too. 23:14, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Shading and highlights both could smooth out a bit more. They look very stark. —

It is (the shading) leaking away from the lineart on the back leg. 00:21, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

^ Along with that, some of it is leaking onto the lineart. —

Her other images do not have texture, so I don't know why this image appears to have texture. 14:07, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

It doesn’t have texture, it’s just the shading ^^

15:25, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Don't forget to reups ;). Can you add some more shading along the bottom of the hind legs/paws and front paws? 23:07, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Could you also smooth the cheek shading some more, it seems blotchy and very stark to me. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:56, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

can you smoothin out the shading, almose evrywhere? it dose look like texture. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 07:40, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Owl, it's suppose to look like that. The shading is artists choice. There are different types of shading styles and textured is one of them. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   08:46, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Is that shading on the muzzle? It looks kind of odd and out of place. 14:15, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

reups

15:48, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the face seems to be a different colour than the shading on the rest of the body, could you change that? :) 16:17, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

reups

17:20, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

the shading on the front leg that gose to the back, can you smoothen that out? it looks flat.<font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:42, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

The shading still looks very blotchy. Is there anyway you can maybe like - take another colour to use to blend the shading? I can't explain it so here's an example of what I mean, sjsfkljdkf. —

Lower the opacity? That may help.

Sandgorse (T) ~ For Approval
19:01, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

thank you for taking over! can you smooth out the shading at the base of the tail? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:00, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

This looks great! Can you add some more stripes around the edge of the jaw? (Towards the ear). You did great replicating the pattern but on the warrior there seems to be more stripes there. 22:36, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reups :) 23:13, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define tail shading. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:45, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 01:18, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

From looking at the StarClan which shows some skin on the ragged spots, could you add those? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:25, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

The skin is present, but small I'll admit. Did you want me to expand them? 01:27, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, if you would. They seem to cover at least half of the ragged fluffs. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:34, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Hopefully this is better? 01:47, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah that seems better! —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:55, December 23, 2018 (UTC

This Pixellooks super off putting. Also, this looks very very nice! Silverfur  skz  [ 13:26, 12/23/2018 ]

Thanks! Did you mean the pixel on the paw? I’m not sure what you want me to do about that...it’s present on all the other tunneler images. 15:21, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it's suppose to be there cause it's really looks out of place. Hmm, looking at both Sandgorse's other images, there seem to be rag fluffs on the tail and not outside it? Maybe could you add some? (sorry if it feels nit picky or maybe it's just artist's choice.)

Silverfur  skz  [ 16:35, 12/23/2018 ]

Ultimately, ragged patches are artist's choice yeah, but I'm open to a second opinion. I feel like since there are ragged patches present on the tail that they're enough imo 00:34, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Riverstar (Alt. Cotp) - For Approval
Alright, I’m putting this up 80% done, and I’ll do the rest tomorrow. Earpink/nose colour and base colours were given to me by Icy (thanks Icy!). I still have to add shading depth, remove all waste, tidy up, etc. 06:54, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, please don't commment on the shading—I know I have to work on that tomorrow. 06:55, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you fix the eyes? They seem wonky a bit, the --> eye seems to be pointing in a different direction. —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 08:55, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Riverstar (Alt L) ~ For Approval
thinking emoji. —

Define shading, please. —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 08:56, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt A) ~ For Approval
not sure what to think about this

Can you dedine the <-- front leg, smooth the haunch shading, and define tail shading please. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   08:56, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Darken the shading? It's still not very visible. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 09:39, 12/24/2018 ]