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Hunter Blanks - For Approval
I plan on resizing them but that's easier to do toward the end. I also want to edit the tail on the shorthaired blanks a bit. Ref for the pose can be found here. 17:01 Sun Jul 1 2018

can u make the longhair tail somewhat fluffier 19:08, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

Could you add whiskers? 00:30, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

You don't have much of a limit here, but I'm just going to bump this so you know that you do have at least two comments here. Not sure if you've seen them or not. (  05:07, 7/07/2018  ) ​

Add more fluff to the longhairs shoulders and neck? 20:23, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Resized and added floof+whiskers. 1:52 Tue Jul 10 2018

Idk if this is nitpicky or not, but could you have the whiskers connect to the face? :) These are very good, though, Raelic. 01:59, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

maybe a little fluff on the neck/chest area thats showing of the longhair? 20:21, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Wouldn't the whiskers also be on the side facing us? 06:13, July 11, 2018 (UTC)

Unknown Resident Blanks - For Approval
I'll fix the paws and some anatomy soon. Just wanted to get these up. 18:42 Tue Jul 3

There’s waste outside the back paw on the short hair 23:25, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed some things that were bothering me. I may need to tweak the pose a little bit but for now I like these. 20:37 Fri Jul 6

I think the front legs should be slimmer? Not entirely sure, though. 21:45, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

I feel like we'd be able to see the cats thigh bent somewhat more? and the front half of the body seems a bit thicker in comparison to the back, which seems a bit thin if you get what I mean? the front leg closest to us also seems a bit too thick in comparison to the rest of the legs. 01:31, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the lineart of the back leg closest to us double-pixels? Just in that one spot it isn’t, on both images. 21:09, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Still working, Sun? I know there’s not much of a limit for blanks, but... 05:40, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

I am. I've just had some problems with my tablet. I'll upload later today ^^; 11:20 Thu Jul 12

Reuploaded I'm working on that rump area, bear with me there 15:10 Fri Jul 13

Reuploaded If anyone can give me a red line to reference in fixing the proportion issue in the rump, it would be very appreciated ^^' 17:03 Fri Jul 13

Reuploaded 17:09 Fri Jul 13

Beetail (W) - For Approval
I'll fix the flank stripes later, just wanted to get this up. 21:43, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Just a suggestion about the stripes: they should be more "connected" and tangled if you get what I mean. Also, did you receive the file? Just wondering.

Yes, I did. 04:14, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the pale chest into the brown a bit more. Blurring might work. Good job! 08:16, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the neck too.

Still working, Branch? 05:41, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll get it up later today. 16:50, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Might redo the stripes later because I still don't like them. (and to winter - thank you!) 17:10, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe I'm blind, but maybe defie the body shading? Malina457 (talk) 04:52, July 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded There's not much I can do to define it, the shading's was at 77% visibility before. I did make it 80% to maybe help you see it better. 13:29, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

Rushtooth (W) - For Approval
LOL I don't remember how I made the DF 15:12 Sat Jul 7

That dark forest is beautiful, anyway, maybe smooth the darker shading spots, they look a tad off to me, and a bit hard edged Malina457 (talk) 15:46, July 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth all of the shading, maybe. Great job! 08:10, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 15:12 Fri Jul 13

Dewspring (W) - For Approval


I’ve been working on this all day and I’m really happy with how it turned out! (Sorry for this text being so low; my signature was touching the image.) 02:02, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading? 05:04, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:39, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

This is great^^ i think the texture could be dulled a little, and define the shading in between the ears. 12:38, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:13, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Dull it just a tiny bit more? 22:53, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:56, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Lo) ~ CBA
My favorite warrior character. 08:05, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Fixed the shading and stripes because it was bothering me. 10:07, July 11, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? very nice. 22:53, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (Lo) ~ Withdrawn
Hate this but I just want it up. Neon, if you want a second shot at this image just let me know.

Define the shading everywhere. 21:15, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better?

With the discussion that was up on PCA's talk, this should match the old warrior, which wasn't supposed to be redone. 22:45, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

I matched the star and stuff that was facing the same way. Should I match the warrior's side instead?

They should match this, all her images should. 16:41, July 13, 2018 (UTC)

So I'm under the impression that her other images do not match the warrior. I'll redo the stripes to match the warrior's side then, and not the star, medicine cat, etc. Expect an upload later.

Withdrawn Never mind, I can't really get it to match the style of the old warrior. It seems like Mounty used a very specific brush or something which I can't really find. I tried matching it and it turned out to be a disastrous mess. Someone else can try matching it if they can do so.

Dovewing (GC) ~ For Approval
#itried, I'll redo the shading later as I'm not very happy with it. But I am the Chosen One 12:52, July 14, 2018 (UTC) While you do, define the shading everywhere, I can hardly even see it. 13:30, July 14, 2018 (UTC)