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Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120923200241!Shellyheart.png 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me.

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinx the power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.  Charlie  Let's   go to   Candy Mountain  02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

I couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows  call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/5/56/Giratina_orig.gif Crystals   over   Sparks  http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/2/27/Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. -- Đark ɦallows  06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? 20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on these? 00:44, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I am, I've just been having complications with it. My sincerest apologies :(  01:04, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front paws are still a bit too big, can you shrink them a bit? 19:37, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bump the closest eye up higher and smooth out the back. 20:32, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front left (my left) paw should be facing the front a bit more. It's on quite an awkward angle.  Millie  It's   all   black magic!  02:07, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The face looks...How do I put this? Flat-ishPikachushinx the power of the past 14:58, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, the face is fine. With the pose that it is in, the head would be angled that way, making the face appear that it looks kind of 'flattish'. 01:20, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 17:56, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm trying, I really am, the anatomy just frustrates me at times because at this angle, it's difficult to get perfect  02:51, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

The front paw on this<--- side is still at an awkward angle. Could you please fix that? :3 02:57 Thu Oct 25

I'm going to feel horrible for critiquing this, because I'm Horrid at cat anatomy, and I wouldn't be able to do any better. Also, if I repeat anything from up there^ I did Not mean to. I would remove the line on the back, the legs look too thick, the paws I don't think should be wider than the legs themselves, the tail is crooked, as is the back leg closest to us, and to me the neck looks to short. -- 18:08, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the back a little more and move the "foot" on the hind leg back a little. 00:28, October 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week with no update and over a month and a half since the initial upload... Sorry, Ivy, I know you're trying and your blank is cool, but I think someone else should finish this. Keep the pose but get it wrapped up. 16:23, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

I've really been trying, but with the redlines being so different and not entirely getting it, it's just been really difficult. I don't want to give this up, but I guess if the project agrees, I can send my file over to someone new. :/  19:02, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Well I've asked cloudy multiple times what would happen about time limits and such on this, and though an agreements never been made, but I personally think Ivy should have 2 months on this, and if it's not approved by then, someone else could take it, keeping the same pose. It's a blank, it should have a bit more time than normal images. However you would have to keep uploading it Ivy. I certainly wouldn't mind taking over, but I personally think Ivy should get until two months are up before it goes up for grabs to anyone, unless she chooses to withdraw it early for any reason. 05:37, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. Two months is good; twice as long as a normal charart. However, I think Ivy should choose who the blanks get passed off to, since they were hers. I also agree with keeping the same pose, since /that's/ why these blanks were picked.

Alright. Well, I did try and fix them up again, but I really need help on the paws. They are giving me the fits, no matter how much I re-shape them XD  01:32, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Try making them more round, especially the one that is off the ground. 21:33, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Ivy? 04:10, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

I /am, I didn't see the comment. I'm unable to shape the paws right and I am asking for help to get them right, I don't think I worded it correctly but I need a redline over my image on how the paws should look since I can't make them righ. 06:04, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oops. Sorry. I didn't see your comment. Here, I made some redlines. It might be a bit stylized but I hope it helps. 02:33, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

If you give it up, can I take over? Crys tal  hea  rt! ❄  20:48, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

First of all, Ivy's supposed to pick who to give it to when time's up, not just give it to whoever asks. Second, it's quite rude to ask to take over something before it's declined. Please don't do that. 14:31, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

However, it has been two months, as agreed. 03:39, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used Breeze's redline pretty heavily, I hope this does it. If not, I already have someone in mind who can take over. I'm about at my wit's end with this lol  03:48, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (Q) ~ For Approval
Her name, her description, mary-sue, in a good way <3 Comments? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:29, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller, and blur it 19:43, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

e.e I tried, stupid pixlr makes every bit of shading a hard time. When I blur it, it squares, when I change the size, it overlaps the sides. Ah, well, re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:51, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her face, please. =3 01:54, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I love the pattern, but it's unrealistic in the means that the design isn't formatted to the actual pelt of a cat. The pelt doesn't match up by bit and piece when the cat strikes a certain pose. All you need to do is shift a few pieces of the design like the legs, tail, and a tiny bit on the chest. Feel free to disagree though. 04:32, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, Teldy, but I'm inclined to disagree with this. I know a friend who had a cat with a similar pelt to this, and I think it is a possible pelt pattern, even though maybe slightly abnormal. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  10:14, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

What Teldy is talking about is that the pelt moves too perfectly. On the back legs, the pattern needs to be raised up. On the front legs, it need to be brought down, so that it looks more natural. Now the pattern looks like it just goes straight across; which is unnatural. 10:19 Fri Oct 12

Re-uploaded I changed the pelt style to make it more realistic :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:52, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The cream seems kinda pinkish. Was that intentional?

Yeah, the other cream colour I used didn't blend well, so I tried this one, and it looked slightly better. Also, I think if light catches it, it will reveal more creamy :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    16:17, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I think you'll need to change it. It looks skin-colored, and makes it seem like Rowanberry doesn't have cream and brown, but brown streaks of fur.

For a brown and cream cat, I was thinking something like either Molepaw or Ivystripe without the stripes (the forelegs and underbelly) or like a tortoiseshell. 16:33, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    17:30, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

She looks mottled, if you use pixlr, it's probably because of the blur tool, instead of using the blur tool, I'd suggest using the Gaussian Blur tool at a rate of ten. Also, the shading looks a bit hard-edged on her tail. By the way, this is beautiful. =D =3  22:02, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink 01:11, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the brown slightly darker because it looked a bit golden. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:08, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and fix the eyes and the earpink. 08:12 Sat Oct 13

The front leg closest to us, still looks mottled. 23:46, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can't see it mottled :s ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:11, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it. It's near the elbow. 21:17, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern still looks like it's been pasted on. It should curve and go with the body. o3o 00:11, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda gray on the cream. Maybe try and shade with dark brown instead of black 03:19, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shadig still looks hard-edged on her tail, can you blur it? x3 12:15, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:17, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, it looks a little bit paint-brushed on, still. 10:18 Thu Oct 18

Re-uploaded I've made it look more like the apprentice and I've darkened the brown. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    15:23, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes on the haunch connected. ^^  19:31, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    19:47, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it up a bit. 20:19, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten what up? o3o ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    11:57, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The entire image. It's a little too dark. .-.

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    15:09, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a bit gray right now... When Rowan said to lighten up the image, I believe she meant the colors(if I'm right), not really the image itself... (Hopefully you get what I'm saying, since I think I know what you did xD)  02:11, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is...lighter than it should be? o.O

Umm.. it looks black to me...? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:00, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's not black, it's an extremely dark grey. Please fix it. <span style="">08:15 Wed Oct 24

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  11:18, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, the colors really don't match her other images...

Darken and give the shading some depth and define the ear-pink 03:42, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Still working, Feathz? 15:42, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm just trying to figure out a way to do this. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  11:15, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry that took so long. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  13:32, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on her haunch match more? Right now they just look like squiggly lines. 13:59, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  18:06, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it still doesn't look like it matches on the haunch. Thin out the stripes more and make them curve a bit more. Also, with the middle stripe, make it curve in at the top. 13:02, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. This might take a short while. I'm going to experiment with this and ask for help. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  19:01, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry Feather, but it's been a week since your last upload. I'm afraid I have to decline this. 02:19, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll take over >3< (probably will have trouble positioning the stripes o3o)  20:06, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the cream on the haunch. Pad foot Mischief Managed 22:58, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:35, November 15, 2012 (UTC)

Been awhile since anybody's commented...CBA? :3 06:48, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, it's a bit flat. 14:39, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:14, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (W) - For Approval
My first PCA work. I tried to match the kit art... Comments? 17:52, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Dawn, this is /wonderful/ for your first PCA image. I'm very impressed.

Holy... O.O this is excellent. Define the earpink more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:26, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the texture a little and define the haunch shading. ^^ If you use GIMP, I can give you the xcf or if not, I can give you the exact colours I used. 22:39, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Improved?''' Thanks for the compliments. ^^ I do use GIMP, so that would be great help. (Although I probably should have asked from the beginning, heh...) 17:10, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the entire image and in between the legs. 22:17, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. I can hardly see the depth. 14:37, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Improved? 18:29, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but the paw shading needs to be thinner and you need to lighten the belly/chest shading and the midriff shading. 19:13, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Improved? 16:06, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad, and I think I will CBA this. c: 18:48, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:39, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more, especially in the back and neck, I'm having trouble distinguishing the texture in those areas. x3 This is beautiful! 20:01, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. ^^ 20:48, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

A lovely first image. CBA? 23:50, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I just thimk the shading is much too dark and the colour doesn't quote match properly. 10:41, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'll try redoing the colors to match the kit's more. Should be up by tomorrow. 17:58, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I did say should. >.< Is it better now? 17:46, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add a few more streaks of dark brown to the shoulder area 04:07, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? 18:20, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, it's nearly pure blank in a couple spots, and sharpen and thin out the streaks, and maybe lighten them too, he looks mottled right now. 19:50, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded! 17:43, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. S'looking good. 23:26, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The difference isn't showing as much as I'd like though. 14:03, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading and smooth it out some? 03:23, November 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:12, November 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth the shading some more. 20:37, November 14, 2012 (UTC)

I'm having a bit of trouble with exactly what you mean. Could you recommend a specific tool for that? 17:22, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, too. x3 18:54, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:14, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the shading and blur it. :3 06:53, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 15:06, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (Alt W)- Under Evaluation
Tried my best with that shading :P. Comments? Bbun (talk) 01:21, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading. 01:22, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bbun (talk) 01:31, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur it some more and lighten the legs a little. 02:14, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong; but doesn't this need scars? <span style="">12:08 Tue Oct 23

Nope it doesn't, as he was mentioned as scarred in Into the Wild and this alt is from Yellowfang's Secret. 12:17, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ignore the waste in the backround, I'll remove them if that's the only thing I need to fix left Bbun (talk) 18:52, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading on the tip of the tail and lighten the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  вαʐïṉģα   19:01, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope the changes are showing :P Bbun (talk) 19:27, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The file needs to be File:Clawface.warrior.alt.png.

You mean to be renamed or to be changed? Also I don't know how to "define" the tail tip so I'll leave it at that until more people complain. I'm focusing mainly on the waste now. Bbun (talk) 19:34, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There's some waste by his closest ear, his tail, and his paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Halloween!  20:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

When you define the tail tip's shading, you make it more visible. But I agree with Feather, it needs to be defined. 21:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

So where do I put the tail tip shading? And I already know about the waste. So that means I blur the tail tip shading along with the rest of the body? Bbun (talk) 21:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Do you have shading on the tail tip? Looking at it looks like there isn't any, so you could add it, Just make sure they are moth blurred equally. /hope this makes sense /horrible at explaining things. 23:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried at doing the tail shading. Ignore the waste- I'll clean it up later. Bbun (talk) 23:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Please change the file name to what I asked you earlier. You can ask 'Teldy to change it for you if need be.

Re-uploaded Teldy already fixed it, and tell me if the wasteless pic is showing. Bbun (talk) 23:46, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Can you connect the tail tip shading with the rest of the tail shading? It looks out of place with a blotch of unshaded fur. Oh, and I believe I see just a bit of waste near his tail tip. 01:17, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed tail shading and waste. Bbun (talk) 01:29, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

I see waste by the tail. 15:59, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if the new changes are showing. Bbun (talk) 18:19, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There is still waste around the entire image. 18:39, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, this is at least the third time I've asked you. Use this file to upload your image. We follow a naming scheme here, and you need to follow it.

Fixed, I think. Bbun (talk) 19:14, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

No, still not fixed. Make sure to put all of the periods in. Also, there is waste all around the image, I believe. 20:27, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know how to make it file. Removed the waste. Bbun (talk) 22:27, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Cloudy told you how to do it... Define the leg shading a bit. 23:03, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail 23:32, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if there's any tail waste still showing. I uploaded this picture on the link Cloudy showed me. If there's anymore mistakes on this and if its uploaded wrong again, I'll upload it on the link she showed me. Bbun (talk) 16:55, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

It's still not right. Next time you save it as a .png on your computer, just make a copy with the correct name (Clawface.warrior.alt.png), and then make sure to change which image is up above. 18:07, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if the changes are showing. Bbun (talk) 18:53, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Yep. Could you blur and darken the shading a bit? 04:52, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bbun (talk) 20:10, October 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There is a part on the tail with a much darker, blotchy part. Blend that out or remove it altogether  15:49, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 20:50, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I finally found the old .xcf again. Bbun (talk) 00:44, November 7, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur/blend the shading/highlights and it looks like the blob on the tail is still there.

And brighten the ear pink just a bit. 20:51, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 00:36, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redone this boy. Bbun (talk) 04:02, November 12, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading a tad. 03:38, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 22:55, November 14, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading a bit, please. 18:53, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Also define it a bit. Especially the tail shading. 21:42, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope I can get this boy CBA'd soon! Bbun (talk) 22:50, November 16, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

It looks like he has a miscoloured pixel near the tip of his tail Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 00:36, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reups I hope this is one of the last changes I need before he gets approved- its nearly a month! Bbun (talk) 00:12, November 19, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the body shading a bit more. 13:07, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Gray cats are pretty big pain to shade, blig the tail shadings only a bit more 13:13, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-ups Bbun (talk) 00:31, November 20, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Scorchwind (A) - For Approval
Tabby guy! ^.^ ,17:23, November 6,2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes a bit to match the warrior. He's so purdy~ 17:29, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes thicker, too. Very beautiful. =) 17:37, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I also changed his colour slightly to match..but Its still not perfect anyway. ,20:08, November 6,2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match the warrior....like, in terms of style and all... (sorry for not elaborating, I can't think)

Youre evil.. no of course youre not..rawrr ,09:49, November 10,2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Leafy? o3o 03:37, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah! Im just busy. Reuploaded ,16:06, November 13,2012 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink 02:14, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,16:30, November 16,2012 (UTC)

The stripes still don't match the other images. x3 18:50, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

You know what? This: Reuploaded ,13:09, November 19,2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes could match a bit better... o3o. 23:48, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the stripes a little? <span style="">23:55, 19, 11, 2012

x.x Okay, I think that we should actually tell Leafy how to fix the stripes, instead of just saying to make it match better, which is really vague. I agree with Mounty on the blurring.. Maybe you can lighten the stripes a little? They look a bit too dark/brownish. 00:05, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. A) - CBA
I <3333 Brighty! Anyway, she was shone as a solid colored grayscale in Yellowfang's Secret (will add citation in one moment). Comments? 02:08, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Re-uploaded 02:39, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add a bit of shading variation on the back? 04:31, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:36, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 02:15, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Make her less shiny. 11:29, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Also smudge the earpink a tad. <span style="">11:38 Fri Nov 16

Can you define the depth in her eyes? 18:51, November 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * I have no idea what you mean by "less shiny" unless you mean make the highlights less bright; the streaks are fur texturing and I could tone those down, but I'm not getting rid of them. The ear-pink is fine and the eye colors are exactly the same from her apprentices, I'm not changing them. 21:29, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's multiple ways you can make her less shiny looking. You could darken the highlights (if you have them), lighten the shading so there's less contrast to make it so shiny, or you could darken the base coat if you don't have highlights. Also, I'm sorry but I agree with both Berry and Duck's comments. The earpink could be smudged a bit, and there's very little depth in the eyes. Can't hurt to fix that on her main images too, since you don't have to post for an eye change. 14:35, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine. There's plenty of depth in them. 00:00, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:03, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think she looks fine now. CBA? 21:21, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (Alt. A) ~ For Approval


So here he is....I know shading needs to be defined, i'll do that in the next upload, so other than that, comments? Pad foot Mischief Managed 03:01, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a bit? And there might be some gray pixels on the front leg (closest to us). 03:36, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Swiftpaw.apprentice.alt.png. 03:46, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading.

Reuploaded (Dear Lord grey cats hate me...) Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 23:06, November 17, 2012 (UTC) Lighten the shoulder shading. 06:59, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define/expand the lightsource, mostly on her face and tail. owo 15:13, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

And blur/smudge the earpink a tad. 14:16, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Whitethroat(A) - CBA
It's cited. Comments? x3 I fail horribly. ;-;  00:06, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I toned down some of the smudging and adding the nose color that I forgot. x3 01:48, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is awesome, Duck! 8D Define the tail shading a little more and it'll be perfect. <span style="">23:53, 19, 11, 2012

Re-uploaded Thanks! =D 01:49, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">02:24, 20, 11, 2012

Stumpytail (Ki) ~ For Approval
kit with a stupy tail<333 <span style="">10:12 Sat Nov 17

I love this <3 Maybe blur the earpink a tad? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ I hate   pears :3  11:20, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the tip of his tail more rounder? <33  17:47, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i theenk the tail is better now. i didn't blur the earpink, Feather, because it's fine. ( blur tool is so overrated. smudging 5ever. ) <span style="">06:53 Mon Nov 19

I think that the earpink could be blurred a tad, especially on the bottom edges. x3 Way better that I could have done, great job! =)  13:04, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">05:18 Tue Nov 20

Leafstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors are from her leader image, as I have the file from when I made the loner. Comments?

Can you make the cream parts a bit more softer? Sorry for the fail at explaining things x.x Like, can you blur them or something to match the other images xD  21:16, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

They're actually smudged, and it's a pain to do this on a smaller blank. ._. I think it's fine, taking the blank's size into account.

Can you possibly make the cream on the chest a little wider? <span style="">23:52, 19, 11, 2012

Re-uploaded.

Rowanberry (W) ~ For Approval
Oh geex I fails x.x Comments? <span style="">23:07, 19, 11, 2012

Could you possibly blur the shading on the chest? 23:44, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">23:50, 19, 11, 2012

Gah, I hate to mention this, since this is such a pretty image, but it looks like Crystalheart reserved this before you. 02:05, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

There wasn't a date on that reservation. <span style="">02:22, 20, 11, 2012

Nope. There was no date. Therefore, the image is Mounty's.