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Hawkheart (Star) ~ For Approval
I've never done flecks/mottles before.. so critique is kinda needed on that. Color picked from his Medicine cat image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:54, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't you already have an image up? Neverendingmoon (talk) 23:08, May 23, 2014 (UTC)Moony

If you look in the comments for Whiteclaw's, I withdrew so i could work on this one instead.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:11, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Add some earpink, define the light on his legs and tail, and make the flecks and mottles match his other images more. I'd recommend asking the OA of one of them for the file, so you can get the right colours exactly and study the pattern properly. Also, this needs to be named 'Hawkheart.star.png'. 23:14, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Re-Up.  Added highlights to his tail and legs, and i changed his mottles. Does that look better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:07, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think you should define the shading a bit more. Think about where your light is coming from. Is it coming toward him from the top left corner above the hip and tail? Then shade along the right edge of the face (our right) and the tops of the front legs, and the right of the chest and the bottom of the belly. If it's coming from the top right corner above his head, shade the left side of the face, the bottom of the front legs, shade a little on the left side of the chest, shade a lot on the lower left side of the back, and the tail. Just think about where the light is coming from and where the shadows would fall on Hawkheart's frame. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 01:57, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-Up. '''Does that look any better? I couldnt make it to dark, because it was starting to make his mottles blur a bit..~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:20, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and face shading some. 15:32, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up.  Added darker shading. I'd rather not define the ear pick anymore so it still matches his other images, since i color-picked it from his Medicine cat image.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:50, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define means to make it more visible, by whichever means you wish. It doesn't always mean changing the color. It honestly just means make it so we can see it- perhaps changing the lighting in the ears, shifting the style, ect.

'''Re-Up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 19:04, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and define the light source 05:55, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-Up. '''Smudged ear pink and difined the light source.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:03, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light/shading on the tail? Beautiful image, Breeze! 16:51, 05/26/2014

Re-up.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:49, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you make the grey more visible?

Define your light on the paw closest to us, maybe? And smooth out the shading in the top of the closest ear a bit, it looks a bit blotchy (might not be the right word I'm using) 17:35, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. added more gray mottles and smoothed out the shading a bit.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:05, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is swallowing the tail. Lighten the shading on the tail, and define the mottles on the tail as well. The light on the tail could also use some defining. 00:10, 05/29/2014

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:05, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

The mottles need a lot ore defining on the tail. It looks solid, tbh. 21:38, 06/2/2014

Re-up. Defined the mottles and shading on his tail. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:51, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere - it looks a bit flat. 22:03, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I didnt want too make it too dark, since it makes his mottles blur alot.. same with the highlights. But i added more shading too it, so please don't complain that his mottles are blurring. :/--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:51, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink some more. 20:52, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:10, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

So sorry for the long period of time without comments, but sharpen the mottles. 18:28, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Dappletail (Queen) - CBA
Not sure if I got this quite right. It looks alright, but it doesn't look quite as bright as her other images, even though I pulled the colors right from there. Let me know what you think. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 23:44, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source on her back and hindlegs. this is really great, Jay :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:53, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Dunno if it's showing up, but I added highlights on the belly, back, face, tail, and legs. Hopefully that helps. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:09, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Yay, the changes are finally showing up! Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:10, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Remove the white background. Loud star  I see cats with stars in their pelts. 17:56, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Done. The reason it had a white background was I tried uploading it as a JPG from my iPad, which seemed to let the changes show up. I re-uploaded it as a PNG without the white background, but I can't seem to get the changes to show up. :/ Any suggestions? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 18:02, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

The changes are on this link: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140530C/ezimba19266726720400.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 18:25, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the markings. This is amazing! 23:35 Thu May 29

Sharpened and brightened some of the markings. Hopefully that looks better. Changes are here: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140530C/ezimba19266775965500.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 23:49, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on -> front paw. This is gorgeous.

Aw, thanks. :) Defined the shading on the leg and paw. The changes are here: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140531C/ezimba19266720869600.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:40, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the closest hind leg a bit. 13:14, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

I defined the shading, and I also made a few other changes in an attempt to make it look more like the other Dappletail images. Let me know if you like this version or the last version better, I have both saved: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140602C/ezimba19266721982700.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:00, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Add a small highlight/light to her furthest hind leg, make sure it is blurred/smudged/smoothed out enough, and this will be good. 22:04, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Added the highlight, and also added some saturation to the yellow patches, especially on her forehead. This charart has been bugging me, but I think I'm finally happy with it. Any more changes you want me to make? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 03:25, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Ah, dangit, forgot to actually link to the changes. :P Here: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140604C/ezimba19266766311100.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 03:26, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Just define the light on both back legs and the front furthest from us Flawless :D   10:49, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Defined the highlights. If I add any more highlights to that left back leg though, it's going to blot out the color. I hope this is alright. Here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140608C/ezimba19266729550000.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 19:55, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? this is great 04:51, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Boulder (Star) ~ For Approval
throw me your commentses 13:30 Fri May 30

Blur the stripes just a little bit- they're a little too hard-edged compared to the other images.

Shouldn't he have a shredded ear or am I just being a derp? Neverendingmoon (talk) 13:04, May 31, 2014 (UTC)Moony

Maybe shredded ear, but the question is, do cats heal when they die? If so, no shred. 00:01, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

If the cat's injuries aren't said to be healed, then all scars and nicked ears stay. In this case, I don't believe his ear was ever mentioned healed. 20:58, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yea 08:11 Tue Jun 3

Can you upload the changes to iaza or somewhere so we can see them?

Still working? 18:29, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Molepaw (NP) (A) ~ CBA
Please bear with me on the sloppyness, I've not made a charart in ages ^_^ Pikachushinx the power of the past 14:49, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

The file name needs to be File:Molepaw (NP).apprentice.png. Would you like me to rename it for you?

Yes, please, I don't remember how. V_V Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:19, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. Only 'ops can rename files, hence why I offered. Reuploading under a different file name just duplicates files and makes it messy. As for the image itself, could you darken the shading, define it, and depending on how it looks after that, you may also want to darken the base pelt, since he is black. Try just fixing the shading, reupload it, and see how it looks- if it's still too light, then darken the base pelt. I use between #171717 and #0E0E0E, but the darker you get, the more difficult it is to shade. Seeing the lineart in all places is not mandatory, especially on black cats.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Although I don't think the changes are showing :/ Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:52, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

I believe the entire muzzle needs to be gray, and sort of smudge the part where the gray paws meet the rest of the leg; smudge it into little 'tufts', since it looks rather abrupt. Not bad! 16:54, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Upload the changes to iaza or tinypic and link it here, that way we can see the changes. Wikia's being a butthead with images right now.

Re-uploaded, but Wikia's still being a butt. I smudged the muzzle, too. Here. Pikachushinx the power of the past 17:06, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Could you darken the pale gray some? It's bordering off-white. 01:53, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Here Pikachushinx the power of the past 06:49, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Darken it a touch more. 23:29, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''In case Wikia's still being stupid, here. Pikachushinx the power of the past 08:20, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Darken it some more - it still looks a bit close to off-white. 22:05, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Pale gray is an off-white. I think the paws are fine.

Still working? 21:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly I think the grey is fine so CBA? 05:02, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

I didn't change the grey since as said above, pale grey IS off-white. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:08, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Morningflower (Queen) ~ For Approval
Not very proud of this one.. never done a tortie before. I think i might of smudged her markings a bit too much.. oh well. Comments? ~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:06, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the patches just a tad bit. 01:04, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:11, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. I'll promote you to apprentice as well due to your knowledge and understanding of the basics of charart making. =)

The patches could be sharpened more. 23:42, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear? 21:27, 06/2/2014

Like Appledash said, the patches need to be sharpened more likeo n her other character arts, also, to match the other character arts she could use the underside of her tail being white. Brick  15:17, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ki) ~ For Approval
OMG Mapleshade is so fluffy. ;-; This is my first charart for the Warriors Wiki. Comments?

Define th shading a bit more, and add a few highlights. Also add a little more depth too her eyes (You dont have to do this one, its just preference).~Breezeheart~ (talk) 13:09, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Highlights aren't mandatory.

Re-uploaded ~ Added a bit more shading and highlights. Hope you can see it (when the re-upload finally appears on the wiki :/ ).

The white is really gray on the tail, so brighten that up a bit. This is really good and matches quite wonderfully. .o.

Although this was supposed to stay as "for evaluation", since you obviously understand the basics and what it takes to make a charart, I'll let this stay how it is and promote you to apprentice.

Re-uploaded ~ Made her tail brighter. I had to upload the new one twice before it appeared on the wiki. >~< Hope it's better now. Thanks for the praise! :3

Could you make the tail shading just a little darker? She's so cute :o  Anais ♥ (talk)   14:46, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ I darkened the tail shading, but I hope it doesn't look too gray again. ^^

Define the shading everywhere but on the tail. 23:30, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ I'm not really good in defining shading on small pictures (or I just don't understand what it means ^^'). Better now? (If not, can anyone tell me please how to define shading?)

Fircone (alt Ro) ~ For Approval
I honestly don't think that mottled is my thing. Comments? 17:44 Sat May 31

Define the shading, its barely visible. Also, try blurring/smudging the mottles a little bit.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:56, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think both are fine, but if someone else agrees, I'll change it. <span style="">0:42 Sun Jun 1

I agree with both. 13:58, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading everywhere except the belly + back could be defined, but the mottles look fine. 23:41, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">0:43 Mon Jun 2

i think the mottles could be blurred a tad 06:45, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">20:38 Mon Jun 2

Define the shading a bit and perhaps smudge the white specks a tiiiiiiinnnyyy bit? <span style="">21:29, 06/2/2014

I think the shading is fine, although I don't think the changes for the new image are showing. Click here for a free muffin and coffee <span style="">0:44 Tue Jun 3

yeah can you define the shading more, the different colors just make it harder to see 00:10, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:34 Fri Jun 6

CBA? 22:08, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks super black- lighten it a bit, and if you can't distinguish it form the rest of the body, give it a faint navy tint or something. That should usually do the trick. 03:33, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Wind (Q)- For Approval
Hello hi I did Wind's queen, if changes don't show it's right here''. Anais ♥ (talk)  '' 17:44, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and back. 23:39, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Belly shading is fine, imho. Define the leg shading.

Define the shading on the face and tail, and the front legs. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 00:26, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Anais ♥ (talk)   00:47, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

The shading in general should be blurred thoroughly. 22:27, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

Windflight (Star) ~ For Approval
The images' tails don't match, so I used the elder's. Comments? wish me luck 18:29, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

On the --> paw, the stripes go across the fingerclawthingy paw segments weirdly on the back higher up one. I hope that made sense. Good luck! Brick 20:23, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, unless someone disagrees, since the stripes are supposed to be in that similar manner. Also, try to use better phrasing next time, dear, since I barely managed to understand what you said ^^;; 21:21, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

re-up I did fiddle around with him a bit, though, to make him match others a bit more. 23:03, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

and if anyone wants to see the changes 20:46, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define/darken the chest shading.

re-up did some other minor stuff too 23:01, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-up more stuffs done 23:39, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? <span style="">16:37, 06/8/2014

re-up 22:07, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (Star) - For Approval
My first StarClan charart. Comments? Brick 20:18, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Edity-boop. Showing a version by another member, the pic I made is here http://i59.tinypic.com/25070yc.png Brick  20:19, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, fixed some issue I had with lighting on the face. Link is http://i60.tinypic.com/350kto4.png Brick  06:48, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Whiten the paw some - it's looking gray. 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, hope this is better! http://i62.tinypic.com/110xaiu.png Brick  21:06, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink some - it looks a bit too bright. Also, try using pure white for that paw - maybe it'll make it look whiter. 00:10, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I accidently uploaded an old file instead of the newer version, fixed version issss here --> http://i57.tinypic.com/w1xt9j.png Brick  13:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, especially on the white paw. <span style="">17:02 Sun Jun 8

Re-ups, linky is http://i62.tinypic.com/16kysk.png. is it just me or does he look a bit like a plastic toy with his expression and overall look? Brick  16:55, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Cinderfur (Star) - For Evaluation


Hey so I saw that Cinderfur was on the list for characters needing art, and I'm all like WOO I LOVE THIS GUY. So, here you go. shading i'm so sorry    20:42, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 20:44, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Erm... this isn't the file I uploaded. Wikia, what the heck?!?! 20:45, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the thumbnail of the one you uploaded on the recent photos bar. Define the eye depth and chest shading. Brick 20:50, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups (hopefully Dang it Wikia!)  uggg shading me no likey 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

If it still isn't showing for you (as it seems to be doing for me), I'd reccomend uploading it to an image sharing site like tinypic or Photobucket. Brick  16:45, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Do not use photobucket. That stores the images in albums and things like that. Tinypic is good, and I also think ezimba is a good one.

Oakheart (Alt W 2) ~ For Approval
(it's the fox-coloured alt, it was agreed months ago) Ah, I remember withdrawing this so long ago :p glad I could get back to it. 21:16, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Make the ear more pink, it looks quite beige. oh my starclan i love that texture      Brick  14:58, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Ear pink looks fine to me.

Hmm, maybe try making the tail texture go with the fur more? As in, make it curve more with the tail. Nice job, dear. 00:12, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Reups gracias~ here's changes 18:30, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (Alt Ki) - For Approval
21:44, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Upload the changes elsewhere, please. It's only showing mine. =/

Arg wikia. Here he is c: 00:07, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the body itself. Also darken it and expand it.

Re-uploaded 15:17, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Expand and blur the shading along his back.

Re-uploaded 00:11, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back a little more? <span style="">17:58, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded 03:52, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Russetfur (Lo) - For Approval
Dazzy's reservation ran out so this is mine now. All colors are from Russet's starclan image 01:09, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Her stripes look a little thinner than on her other images, can you make them slightly thicker please? Brick 14:55, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Looks alright to me 20:42, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Her stripes kinda fade into the shading. I'm not sure how to explain how to fix it but I'm sure you know how. Sorry for not being able to be specific ;-; <span style="">16:34, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded 03:44, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Poppyfrost(Q) - For Approval
changes this was fun c: 21:27, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Why does it look like she has stripes on her? o.o She needs to be dappled and if you have them, I'm having a rough time seeing them. Also blur the transitions between colors, and blur the shading on the white a lot. At the same time, define the shading on the non-white.

Re-uploaded whoops I though those were stripes when I was going off of the kit lol 22:07, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Changes 00:10, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples just a littttleee bit more? <span style="">15:08, 06/7/2014

Re-uploaded 15:53, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add depth- lighten it a bit on her legs and stuff. It'll be lighter in some areas than others. 20:29, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:56, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Molepaw (NP) (Kit) - For Evaluation
Hmm...not bad, for my first. I think I did a pretty good job. Critique is apprectiated. 22:30, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

omg so cute good job I think you should lighten the shading near the paws a little bit. <span style="">21:05 Fri Jun 6

Re-uploaded, changes here ---> http://www.ezimba.com/work/140607C/ezimba11121565737900.png if not showing. 21:51, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey just slightly? Then i think itll be good for CBA 05:03, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

I'd smudge where the grey meets the black on the paws, too. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:09, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. http://www.ezimba.com/work/140610C/ezimba11121599713900.png Changes refuse to show. ;-; Lightened the gray a bit and smudged it some. 20:16, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Whitetail (Q) ~ For Approval
due to the light source of course she'll look a little gray. Comments? 22:35, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you please give a link to the changes? <span style="">16:29, 06/8/2014

I see the changes, but here ya go! 22:02, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading, or something? Make it less grey? I know it would look grey, but this looks more grey than it does white. 22:07, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, since 1) Shading darkness is artist's choice, and 2) there's no way I can do that without making her shading look flat, sadly, since most of this light source's shading would make a good portion of the body shaded. 22:10, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

It may be artist's choice, but there's a difference between that and being asked to lighten it so we can /tell/ it's a white cat. I agree with Shoon. While it may be the source, it's still very hard to tell aside from the blindingly white highlights.

re-up i tried 22:37, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

A suggestion I can give if your having issues shading white cats is you can always use tinted shading, like a blue color or something, on white cats. <span style="">23:18 Sun Jun 8

Thing is, she wouldn't match her other images with the tint, so I'm using the gray tint. 23:25, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Tint doesn't have to matter between images. If tint totally makes it look super different, maybe your shading is blurred too much/too thick, but since it's just defining where joints and stuff would be on the body it shouldn't matter. 03:31, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

re-up all i did was make it blue-ish o3o 18:19, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

re-up beebs was so lame, she forgot the earpink 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Graystripe (Alt. W) - For Approval
No, I will not make him brown. Changes are here because I forgot to get rid of a layer. If you see white flecky things instead of a darker pelt, then changes aren't showing.

Define the shading on the foreleg closest to us? I can see the shading on the paw fine, it's just on the leg itself. <span style="">16:28, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded.

Quince (Q) - For Approval
I stole (not stole lmao since it's mine) the collar for Velvet, since both she and Quince are supposed to have the same style collar for the kittypet and queen images. Changes are here just in case.

Uh, it might be just me, but the picture file is normal lineart, but this looks thinner? o.o <span style="">21:38 Fri Jun 6

It's the changes. They're not showing on Wikia (but they are for me, actually), hence why I linked it.

Blur the belly shading a bit? <span style="">16:25, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded.

Blur the shading a little and add some more depth to it- add areas where the shading's much darker, and areas where it'd remain lighter. Also make sure all of the shading stays on the lineart, because it's beginning to leak away around her belly. 20:27, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the shading and I really don't like this lmao.

Tangleburr (Kit) - For Approval
First charart since joining again. Comments? <span style="">21:19 Fri Jun 6

I'm sorry but since you reserved after posting this, it may have to be declined... I may be wrong, though, so don't shoot me if I am. 21:30, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

-Shrug- Oh well. My chararts aren't good anyway ;~; <span style="">21:31 Fri Jun 6

Nah, it was only a couple minutes, as seen here, and sometimes it takes that long to post an edit somewhere. I think Cloud should be allowed to keep the image. I'd have no complaints. Some people forget the dates at first too and we let them slide.

Okie, just had to check~ ask Berry for the file of one of the other images, I believe Berry did those ones, so that you can get the colours precise; it looks a little lighter than the warrior, but it could just be my kindle. Define your shading and texture too. Don't you say that your chararts aren't good, Whisker; honestly, this is great, for your first in a long time! 21:49, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

I asked her, now I have to wait xD thanks sorrel   <span style="">22:01 Fri Jun 6

Re-up. Shading is a bit better, I think. Also defined texture. <span style="">22:24 Fri Jun 6

Define the texture a bit more? <span style="">21:37, 06/7/2014

Re-up. Also defined texture on patches. <span style="">23:01 Sat Jun 7

Sharpen and thin out the shading a lot. 20:26, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I oculdn't really sharpen it, but re-upload anyway~ <span style="">23:32 Sun Jun 8

Runningnose (D) - For Approval
i'll just leave this here <span style="">00:30, 06/7/2014

He needs a gray muzzle. 00:34, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

reup <span style="">02:29, 06/7/2014

Add light to the far hind foot bc that wouldn't totally be in shadow unless he's super awkward at sitting. Thicken the rump shading a little more, and add a bit more towards the center of his haunch because cats are skinny and the bones would protrude a little more on an older cat. 20:24, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Tansy(Lo): For Approval
Eee I'm very happy about Fircone uvu! Here's Tansy! http://www.ezimba.com/work/140607C/ezimba18819864628800.png Anais ♥ (talk)   01:40, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading a little, thin it out a touch, and settle on one light source: the shading on the left and face suggest it's coming from the front of the body, but everything else says it's coming from above. Fantastic job though! 20:23, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Yes, I know the pattern does not match 100%, but this pattern was really hard, and with all the tiny stripes, I think I have sustained eye damage from squinting so much. You guys have no idea how long I've wanted to make a charart for this cat and now that I finally can is a miracle. <span style="">17:22 Sat Jun 7

Define the shading on the front legs, belly, and face? This is amazing Hawky~ <span style="">21:35, 06/7/2014

Re-uploaded. Thank youuu. <span style="">21:49 Sat Jun 7

Lighten the shading a little, And change the position of the white in her eyes because it'd be coming from the same angle as the light on her body. Good job! 20:20, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Merci. <span style="">21:27 Sun Jun 8

Brook (KM) - For Approval
changes  <span style="">21:31, 06/7/2014

Define the facial shading juust a bit. 22:20, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it just fine; I'd rather not touch it unless a few more agree. ^;;; <span style="">15:24, 06/8/2014

Just a tiny bit more. Love those eyes *.* <span style="">19:08 Sun Jun 8

reuploaded <span style="">19:20, 06/8/2014

Lighten the shading a little or tint it navy or something because her whole rear half looks black. 20:19, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Marmalade (Lo) - For Approval
So, any thoughts? Not sure if I totally matched the stripes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:20, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Totally forgot to add the tear in his ear. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:29, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Changed some shading that was bugging me. (sorry I'll stop after this 'til someone comments) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:53, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

blur the tail, facial, and neck shading a tad? 05:06, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Did you remember to tear his ear? I can't tell whether it's there Dazzling, sweetie 15:36, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, the ear tear is there, but it's small so it's hard to tell. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:45, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Star) ~ For Approval
?? i tried 02:39, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Ottersplash (Q) - For Approval
- meh. All the colors are from her warrior 03:45, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe try tinting her shading just a little bit more on the dark red side? It's starting to really make the ginger look gray-ish. idk what color you used to shade the ginger so if you're already using that kind of color plz ignore me

Define the shading on the face, and get rid of the white background. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:55, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Snowfur (Q) ~ For Approval
Should I tint the shading a more blue-gray? Not sure if it looks gray or not. changes here, if they're not showing; comments? 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)