Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined Art 6

Emberfoot - Withdrawn by User
Okay, so Crowfrost didn't go to well. But here's my second shot at a new character. G B 39 05:38, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

More shading needed GB!-- Sandy 15:12, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Better? G B 39 15:56, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Maybe some more shading on the hip area, and more blending on the current shading. Also, the ear color looks more purple than pink. -- Bramble Bramble's Realm 16:44, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

I'm way to busy right now to work on three images, but I'll work on the other two. G B 39 17:50, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Icepaw-Withdrawing


I did Icepaw, since Shim-Shim was doing Foxpaw. Tell me how I did-- Mallinois  The Doghouse  23:21, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Wow, no ones commenting. I'll just fix it up. I'm busy with Dawnpaw, so...--Mallinois The Doghouse  19:34, 14 December 2008 (UTC)


 * I'll comment. Well the shading seems, not sure if this is the right word, but blotchy or something. Did you smear them instead of blue because it looks smeared to me. It might just be my screen. -- Shimmer Crytals 22:15, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

I updated. Plus, Shim, your sig says crytals instead of crystals. --Mallinois The Doghouse  01:35, 15 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Oops XD Thanks Mallinois. Its becoming better. I think it could use more blending and shading. This is what I like doing: Blend, Smudge, Blur and repeat. Works like a charm :)-- Shimmer Crystals 05:54, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Withdrawing, Because I have too many images up and want to finalize certain ones. --Mal lin ois  15:42, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Bumblekit-Withdrawing


This is my try at Bumblekit. Comments needed. If someone could help me get the background white, I would appreciate it. Whenever I turn the background white, the lineart turns white.--Mal <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">lin ois  14:32, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

I think the lineart changes colour too because it is the same colour as the background and so has now become part of the background. I think the eyes need pupils to make them look more natural, and the stripes need to blended more so they to look natural. The pink ear is too pale also.-- Sandy Leader's Den  15:25, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

The eyes have pupils (just look closer :) and they are yellow like a Bumblebee's stripes! (ha, Ha) I'll try to blend those stripes more! --<font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mal <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">lin ois  15:26, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

The background needs to be white. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="White" style="background:Black">39 00:37, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Sorry Mallinois - didn't see that. The eyes look good but the image still needs more shading and the background is going to need sorting out too as GB mentioned.-- Sandy Leader's Den  13:47, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Withdrawing, for I ahve too many images up and I want to focus on my three favorites. --<font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mal <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">lin ois  15:41, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

KittyPet Blanks ~ Withdrawn


Until I can get GIMP, I'll help with blanks. This is a blank for a ShortHaired Male KittyPet. If you like him, I will make and post the other three here too. (short female, long male, long female.) Both critism and coments are welcome and accepted. ;) --Mumble785 17:39, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Um... it looks a little bit like that one dog that I can't remember the name of. :\ <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="White" style="background:Black">39 17:54, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Your right... Maybe because of the eyes or the nose... --Mumble785 19:26, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I curved the neck a little, and copyed on of the male warrior's eyes. Is that at least a little better? --Mumble785 19:36, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Mumble, I'm sorry, but these simply cannot be approved. We have permission only to color the warrior and apprentice blanks, not to edit them. F x  C  20:16, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

FxC's right, Mumble. I can see a resemblence with ths blank and the male warrior's, so I'm guessing you edited it. Sorry. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="White" style="background:Black">39 22:10, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok. I'm gonna redo him. I don't like the fact that he looks a lot like a dog... O.O It's creepy. --Mumble785 23:30, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Since you modified the warrior blank, It won't be accepted. --<font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mal <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">lin ois  23:50, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

REUPLOAD. Ok. this time, he's all my work. Ok? What do you think now? --Mumble785 00:08, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

He looks, scary. --<font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mal <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">lin ois  00:09, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

Is that because of the head? I couldn't figure out how to get it to look, well, normal. :/ --Mumble785 00:15, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

Mumble, I'm sorry, but this was obviously edited from the warrior blank. It is not "all your work." A blank is an original drawing (usually from a reference picture, that's how I did my deputy blank). The point is, this image was derived from a blank and it would need to be re-done from scratch. If you want help on referencing blanks from actual images, message me (the "x" in my signature is a link to my talk page). F x  C  22:45, 27 December 2008 (UTC)


 * O What?!?! WithDrawn... Seroiusly man!!!!!!!!!! --Mumble785 23:21, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

Mumble, there's no reason to freak out. Follow the rules next time. :/ <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="White" style="background:Black">39 02:16, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Even though this has been withdraw, this is just to help if you want to have another go at it. The only big problem I can see is that there is no break in the connection of the muzzle and the forehead. The forehead should reach out a little past the eyes, then drop down a little bit, then continue out to create the muzzle. Also, the muzzle is a little large. Make the distict drop between the forehead and the muzzle, and make the muzzle a little smaller, then I think it'll look much better. Other then that, I don't see any problems.. 72.81.208.205 23:10, 31 December 2008 (UTC) Random Quest

Frostfur ~ Withdrawing


I finaly get to do a long-haired she-cat. What do you think of her? --Mumble785 01:20, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

She looks like you just painted everything on her. And the tail shading should not stretch out like that. Try this:Smudge, Blend, Blur, and repeat. Try adding shading with the darken tool, and hightlights with the lighten tool.(Though that's not needed with the white cats) If you want a model for good shading, use Gorse's Weaselfur. (Awesome pic, Gorse) --<font color="Silver" style="background:Blue">Mal <font color="LimeGreen" style="background:Black">lin ois  01:34, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok. I'm gonna wok on her tomarrow. (or when I get bored...) --Mumble785 02:37, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Is that at least a little better? (And I agreed with you about the painted on thing...)


 * Mumble, I hate to say this, but this probably won't be approved. Frostfur was last seen as an elder and we don't have an elder blank. We also don't have a queen one either. But I shall comment on picture anyway cause I'm that type of person :], add more shading to her and blend and smudge away. Remember to have fun as you work. -- Shimmer Crystals 02:32, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok. I'll make her look as though she was approved, and use her as an example for my other pieces. So I'm still gonna make her!!! --Mumble785 18:19, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

Nah... I'm gonna drop her out and do a different one. Do you want me to delete this article? --Mumble785 16:39, 31 December 2008 (UTC)


 * No leave it and say your withdrawing it. Kitsu or someone else will delete since we aren't allowed to since we aren't leaders of the project just members.-- Shimmer Crystals 04:59, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Kk. Withdrawing then! --Mumble785 20:39, 1 January 2009 (UTC)