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Mistystar (L) - Redone
Original artist is Mousetalon :3 Meh, I really hate this xP I'll probably darken the shading and ear pink later. 18:08, July 11, 2011 (UTC) You did take the colors off of her kit image, right? xD Blur the haunch shading. 19:10, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing :P 19:30, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Fill in the whole ear with earpink. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  20:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The whole ear doesn't always need to be filled. It's the artist's choice. But yeah, Nighty, I think you should darken the shading :3 21:37, July 11, 2011

All I can say is darken the shading and remove the spot above her ear. Also, it might just be me, but her eyes look a little unfocused. Her left eye looks like it's looking up, while the right is looking at you. 01:37, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, changes aren't showing again x3 You'll know the changes are showing when there's no smudge above the ear :P 08:33, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should fill the whole ear with ear pink,but if you dont want to I think you should at least make it triangular and not an upside-down V shape.But thats just my opinion...do what you like.Dovey Newbie! 15:27, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes filling the whole ear shouldnt be optional. The blanks designed to have the whole ear filled. 02:07, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 02:16, July 13, 2011 (UTC) As Rainwhisper said, it's the artist's choice whether or not to fill in the entire ear. Also, I've seen plenty of approved leader chararts with the ear pink not filling the entire ear. 02:41, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and im changing those right now. 02:46, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Did you darken the tail shading yet? :P 16:15, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Oh, and did you take the color off of her kit charart? that one has already been redone, so this one needs to match. 17:03, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Yep, I took them straight off the charart. Oh, and Reuploaded  23:46, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Good. =) Blur the bottom of the earpink. 01:09, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded  04:50, July 19, 2011 (UTC) It needs a grey nose.  05:03, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the highlight on the front leg.  15:49, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear part that indicates it. 02:02, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

That's optional, you don't have to do that. But make the earpink more triangular and bigger, first. Maybe smudge it a tad later. :3 15:44, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hollowpaw (A) - Tweaked
Added the white belly. Original artist: Hawktalon Darkhallows   Enter the cave? 03:39, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Blur a bit more where the white meets the brown.  Law liet  Li ght 03:57, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Nice! there's a strip of white right next to the arm/front leg, so make that match in color :) 04:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Great job! Blur the white part more.  16:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Woo. ;3 Smudge the white, a bit, too. Andmake the earpink smaller.  01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Looking good!  16:07, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 17:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Shading fail. Anyways, Here's Mousefang. I redid the shading, but I don't think I like the pattern. Might choose another pattern for this one. Anyways, comments? 05:18, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Oh!

And I believe the original artist was Shaf Girl :) 05:20, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

All I can say is define the shading alittle and make the earpink fill in the ear correctly--

The eye is misshapen, blur shading on the chest, thicken shading on the haunch a tad, make the earpink proper, and I'm pretty sure you're supposed to shade/highlight the tail the other way.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 06:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Plus, the erpink looks a little missapen at the bottom, and the chest shading needs to go on the chin as well. The eye color is too neon. 14:02, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur teh shading on the chest. 16:49, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could, darkened eye, fixed eye, darkened earpink, lightened shading at some parts, fixed tail shading, added chin shading, fixed anglement of the earpink...and... yeah. xD 17:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. :P 19:29, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Changes were showing, but not anymore. It stopped showing the changed before those two past comments, but it wouldn't let me edit xD 00:03, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, changes are showing again. Sorry I was at the beach all day, re-comments? 01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy. Would you like me to help as I did with Whitewing, or can you do it? Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:05, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her neck. Looks great otherwise~ Chell;  Aperture Science Test Subject.  19:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Mintstar: I'm sorry that you're doing all this for me ^^' You don't have to blur it though, but thanks anyways :D Getting a new computer soon, it will be great starting from scratch.. 19:09, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, just blue the earpink a tad more~ Chell;  Aperture Science Test Subject.  20:41, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :D 00:54, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink still looks kinda crooked --

Re-uploaded. 03:21, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading under the ear and the stomach shading where the haunch meets the upper body, close to the back. 03:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 21:53, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:27, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading looks a little too concentrated, if you know what I mean. Maybe it's just me ♔  S u n s p i r i t  ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 07:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix it. Just letting everyone know that the changes are no longer showing. 16:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, and I don't think blurring it will help. Try redoing it? Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:48, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on this, just trying to do it all on GIMP. GIMP is new to me so it might take a day or so. It'll be up by tomorrow. Sorry. 17:24, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, Re-uploaded. I know the shading needs to be blurred some, but here is my GIMP version ^^' Never to use Pixlr again...hopefully :3 Thanks to Frostheart who gave me her GIMP tutoiral on Teamviewer...lol. 18:26, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken shading on the haunch. Lovely! Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 18:32, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'll fix that little strange line next reupload. Do you think I should darken the legs? :P And thanks Snowdazzle :D 01:20, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, highlights and shading, lighten the higlights and they're are pink blots in the background, I'm not sure if you'd notice it, so I made a picture. Also, shorten the neck shading. ♔ S u n s p i r i t   ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 11:30, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (D) ~ Redone
Original artist - Bramble; Redone - longhair. 17:11, July 18, 2011 (UTC) And, don't tell me to blur the shading, because I've blurred it as much as possible. 17:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Darken the scars' colour. 18:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I got it off of his other charart. Not changing that, or the earpink color, or the pelt color. 19:03, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I got my charart's color from his warrior, but I'm changing it. Tweak Week is supposed to make them look better, so I think you should change it. Also make the pelt color a little more blue-gray. 19:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC) It is blue-gray, but I'll make it a little bluer. 19:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC) RE-Uploaded' but changes aren't showing... 19:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC) He was also called gray, light gray, and dark gray, so I don't see why it should be so blue. 19:44, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Blur highlights. Wild   breath   21:26, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I said already; I've blurred it as much as possible. 21:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Can you try blurring just a tad more? It doesn't need to blurred a lot more, anyways. Add some shading to the front back leg. Also make the scars more noticeable. :3 15:42, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. 16:38, July 19, 2011 (UTC) In the space between the haunch and the front leg the pelt seems to be lighter than the rest of the pelt. Can you maybe add shading there or make it so it matches the rest of the pelt? 20:51, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded 23:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Grrrr...changes still won't show. 23:14, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back legs. 19:27, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Aww...if you had commented 4 hours later, it would be approved. xD Re-Uploaded. 09:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make this more blue? :3 I'm not sure if it's just me, but it's really gray. Add some shading to ze chest, otherwise, awesome. ;D 15:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Its blue enough; Stonefur has been described as dark gray, light gray, and gray, so I think its fine to be a mix of everything. There is shading on the chest, but I'll define it. Re-Uploaded.. 00:24, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (L) - Tweaked
Ugh... I've had this done for awhile, but wasn't sure about the neck. Anyways, the shading was blotchy, the eye was altered, earpink looked off, and the original artist was Shimmerpool. If it's blotchy, I can remove the highlights. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  15:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

She needs silver round her muzzle.Voldemort: Harry, kiss me! 15:02, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I just highlighted the muzzle. Reuploaded. Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, I think it was supposed to be that way, But tweak it if you want x) smudge the earpink and add shading to the front left leg -- 17:27, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the highlights on the tip of her tail to give her a silver tail tip? She has one ;3. Also make the earpink less....flouresent. More naturual. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Her eyes need to be a lighter coulor. In the first book, it mentioned her eyes being "ice blue". 18:21, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

There's a couple of specks over her ears. Otherwise, it looks fine to me. 19:24, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- forgot the silver tail-tip, but does it look fine? Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:25, July 21, 2011 (UTC) Great job! Blur the chest shading a bit more. 09:49, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Should I just remove the highlights, so they won't interfere with the shading? Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:09, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good! I thought she had another scar on her haunch, but i dont remember. Great Job! 15:20, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can the chest shading be blurred more? 17:05, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight more. Good job! Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:11, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Don't grey cats have black noses?Voldemort: Harry, kiss me! 15:29, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, flip it, BLACK cats have gray noses Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and gray is a light black. But fur color doesn't nescisarrily matter. Skin color does. I've seen black and gray cats with both black and pink noses. Having black fur doesn't always mean that the skin is black. But I think the pink nose is fine, personally. 17:37, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

the earpink needs a little darkening Oh no! emergency!   C a <font color="#363636">n <font color="#4D4D4D">y <font color="#636363">o <font color="#787878">n <font color="#8A8A8A">s <font color="#A1A1A1">o <font color="#B0B0B0">n <font color="#C2C2C2">g   <span style="color:#FFFFFF;background:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#CC1100;">Candypaw to the rescue!   21:17, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, darken the earpink then blur it. It's optional, but maybe smudge the inner part of the ear upward to make a more realistic feel. ♔ S u n s p i r i t   ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 11:34, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (K) - Redone
Original artist was Icestorm. He needed to look like his other images, so I just took the colors from his apprentice image. I changed the earpink though. Also the changes aren't showing yet. 15:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I am not sure if this is Stormkit or Crookedkit, if it is Crookedkit then make his jaw well crooked.... You want to make it unique.... The more unique the more people remember it and say "That artist is the best" !!!! Oh and make the eyes look forward not to the side. Cute but could be cuter..... 17:28, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The jaw is the only comment that is constructive. It should be taken into consideration. 17:35, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't know if I should give him a crooked jaw or not because he was seen without one, but I guess someone will make him a charart without a crooked jaw as Sormkit once Tweak Week is over. I'll reupload this in a little bit. :) -- 19:30, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I don't know if this is how it should look... xD The changes aren't showing yet. 14:26, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe define the ear pink a little more? 17:01, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:49, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Did you add the crooked jaw? I don't see it. 20:17, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yep it's there.. xD 21:28, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Aw I love his crooked jaw! Maybe lighten the shading on this ---> side? Other than, it looks great! Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 11:32, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 15:17, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, but I thought his jaw was supposed to be crooked the the way? 00:11, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Yep, you're right, I changed it. ;3 16:31, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W)~ Tweaked
Original artist was Icestorm. The ears needed to be torn. I wasnt sure if i shouldgive her snaggly teeth, more scars, and messy fur like Thistleclaw, what do you guys think? 19:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lineart on the torn ears thicker. Along with your suggestions, all her chararts should depict her with a broad, flattened, Persian-like face (Vicky confirmed to me that she is of Persian decent) 19:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy on the flattened muzzle, but skip out on the long teeth. If Stonetooth's art doesn't depict his long teeth, this one shouldn't either. 19:49, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:02, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:15, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pinks not my problem. 16:36, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the smudging on her pelt a tad? You don't want to lose it, but at the same time it does stand out a little. This is coming along nicely! 21:12, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- 14:07, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the line-art under the muzzle smoother, It bends in a little on it's way down the neck. ♔ S u n s p i r i t   ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 11:36, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Weaselfur (W) - Tweaked
Well, original artist was Sandy, the shading needed to be blured, and because all the other ginger images needed stripes, heck, I gave him stripes too ;3. Comments? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  22:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes smaller, I think. Now he looks less ginger, more brown. 00:50, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the stripes a bit. They look too dark. I always thought stripes on ginger cats weren't prominent, and you can't really tell that they have them. Well, with this, you can tell. Okay, I'm done rambling. All in all, this looks really good! 11:15, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid it. Comments? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:54, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look really, really blotchy. They don't even look like stripes. 19:10, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this looks really weird...I'm NOT trying to be mean, it just looks like the pelt is watercolored or something. You might want to redo it. The white part of the paws coming onto the arms need to be blurred into the pelt a little, and the earpink looks neon. 20:19, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's an odd line coming out of his chest and a dot behind his head, floating in space. And I agree with them, it does look a little blotchy, but I think it's cool. 21:31, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

And their's a small red dot outside the charart. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:10, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I already said that. 02:33, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller, and there's loads of blurred lineart. And yeah, I agree with Ivystripe: The pelt looks watercoloured, but it's nice that way, I think, and get rid of the extra white above the white on the foot closest to us. It's messy. And the back lineart looks a tad thick. You might want to redo this.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 02:44, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid it. Again ;3. Better? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  15:16, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. But I think the lineart onhis shoulder is blurred a bit. It might just be a dark stripe fooling my eyes, though. 16:36, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on his haunch and chest/jaw area are too dark. Smudge them or lighten them.  HA WK FI RE98  16:56, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on his chest stops as a straight line, making it look unnatural. Maybe curve it a little. 17:56, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Again with the too much brown. D: If the stripes were this prominent, the books would've described him as a tabby. Most ginger cat's stripes don't show much. 17:59, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add the pupil in the eye.Dovey Newbie! 20:09, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

The blue lines mark where the line-art has collided with the fur, and the yellow is to mark you should de-saturate that area. Blur the highlights and white paws. Other then that, nice. ♔ S u n s p i r i t  ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 11:41, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I don't know what to do with the stripes..... 3; Comments? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:06, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Daisyheart (D) - Redone
Not sure if changes are showing or if I got all of the blurred lineart. Original artist was Honeyrose/Bramble. xD 16:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Give her stripes. 16:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good job, I don't see any blurred lineart. 18:59, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a tad darker, I can't see it that much. *needs glasses* Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:08, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid it so I could add stripes. 22:17, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the stripes on the front paws a little. 22:19, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... just an idea, but I think the ginger patches would look more natural if blended a bit into the white. 02:34, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

There is blurred line-art in the muzzle area. Darken the earpink and there is smudged lineart where the first white patch on the tail meets the bottom (I hope you got that xD), along the back and on the haunch. Pretty good! ♔ S u n s p i r i t  ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 11:47, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

There isn't ANY blurred lineart. I redid the image with layers. And Reuploaded. :3 15:17, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white fur. Smooth out the transition between the ginger and the white. 16:33, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Stonepelt (E) - Tweaked
Original artist was Quickstep. I added a scar to his shoulder. 16:44, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

The scar looks a little thick, maybe thin it out a little. 19:00, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's suposed to be thick. It's a "large scar". 19:07, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you used the paintbrush tool for the scar: yes, for does make the scar kind of raggedy, but they are very smooth, so maybe you could try sing the calligrapy brush on a very small setting, and blur it a tad. 20:21, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the scar a little? I don't think most cats would've survived if they'd had a cut that large in the wild. The color makes it look larger than it is. 21:33, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

The scar looks too smooth and painted-on, so here's an example for scars:

Yes, I made a whole new Charart to just draw a selection of scar types because I was bored. SELECTION: Cross-Hatched(circled with green), Straight(circled with red), and Zig-Zag Spiky Thing(circled with blue). Zig Zag Spiky scar is pretty dumb, though.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 03:08, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ehh, I think it would help if you example scars were a bit thicker and flesh colored. The ones on the cat on your user page are really good! I say use that as an example over this one. 03:11, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflight said it was a "large scar", so probably something like thisOh, and the original artist was Quietstep, no Quickstep xD -- 03:24, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Of course, it would HAVE to be smaller than that...but I do think you should add ragged edges to it, but I still think the calligraphy/pen brush sounds good to do the scar. 03:28, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

The scar looks fine to me.... Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 14:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Just make the scar smaller more defined, then it shall be approved. :3 16:00, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (A) - Re-done
Ewie. I don't particularly care for this. I was the original artist, and I re-did this as a tabby. 17:31, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:55, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes look like the leader image. 19:03, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh! I didn't realize his leader had stripes. 19:08, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) ~ Tweaked
....I just put Littlecloud up, and it was already approved. Wow. Anyways. White cats are evil. Original artist was Icestorm, and it needed shading. 17:36, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his chest and neck. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:56, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:23, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 21:13, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Besides darkening the shading a little, I see nothing wrong. :)  HA WK FI RE98  16:58, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hawk, I'm afraid if I darken the shading, the image will start to look gray-ish, and I don't want that. 16:57, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ Tweaked
Needed shading. Orignal artist is Sandwich989. Jeez, this is an awkward color to work with. 18:45, July 22, 2011 (UTC) Add shading to the chest. 18:52, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had added shading to begin with. I think I blurred too much the first time, so that's why you didn't see it. 18:58, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add a light part to the top of his back foot, and blur the front arm shading more. 21:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I have an idea. Am I going to get yelled at if I re-do the image, but follow the exact same color scheme? The darker part of the legs was already there, and it's hard to work with... 14:09, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did it, and cut and pasted the ear pink and the eyes. 14:49, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  15:58, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Been sitting here for an hour doing this, and I do believe I only made it worse. Re-uploaded. 17:27, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (E)- Tweaked
Original artist was Mossfire&Stealthwhisker, and she needed white patches. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:28, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Meh, the line between the white and the black on her face and chest looks unatural. Make it more curvy --

The line's just going straight across, that isn't really natural. xD 22:36, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make it blend in more; also, did you do something to the earpink? Sorry, but the earpink looks like a big blurry blob 22:44, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Ivystripe, I noticed that too. But I wasn't sure if I was supposed to fix that since I was only supposed to add white patches, and her other images have earpink like that. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  23:09, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the image name to Dappletail.elder.png Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:21, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

There needs to be a white tail-tip. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 04:50, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! I love it! There needs to be a white tip like Maplepool said. Other then that, it's awesome!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 13:56, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white patches. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  15:26, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the lighting on her haunch. At the moment it makes her look like she's made of plastic. 16:31, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading on her white chest, paws, and muzzle. Just a light silver shading.  HA WK FI RE98  16:59, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! add white tail tip. 20:02, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the white muzzle and make it gray like in the description. Dovey Newbie! 20:21, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also, change the file name to Dappletail.elder.png. 21:09, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- there doesn't need to be a white tail-tip. It's not in her description nor her apprentice image. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  01:01, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Foxheart (D) - Redone
Not sure if changes are showing and schtuff. xD Same ol' picture uploader. x3 Comments? 15:52, July 23, 2011 (UTC)


 * Oh, and it needed stripes. Original artist was Mousetalon. 15:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks great! Blur the stripes a tad more. Chell;  Aperture Science Test Subject.  15:55, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes stop awkwardly at her muzzle. This is just my opinion, but you can either darken the muzzle to a brownish color or gently lighten it at the tip (like I do with my chararts' muzzles and paws). You don't have to do it if you don't want to. Beautiful charart!  HA WK FI RE98  17:01, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes are supposed to be like that, so they don't need to be blurred. Define the earpink, though. ;3 18:51, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink needs to be a little less redish <span style="color:#FFFFFF;background:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#00688B;">Oh no! emergency!   <font color="#080808">C <font color="#1F1F1F">a <font color="#363636">n <font color="#4D4D4D">y <font color="#636363">o <font color="#787878">n <font color="#8A8A8A">s <font color="#A1A1A1">o <font color="#B0B0B0">n <font color="#C2C2C2">g   <span style="color:#FFFFFF;background:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#CC1100;">Candypaw to the rescue!   21:27, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sunnytail (D) - Redone
Original artist was Goldencloud, and I added stripes 'cause she's ginger. ;3 Comments? 19:22, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous. I can't see anything needing improvement. 19:45, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well done! It looks good! Leaf-storm 20:09, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! but the earpink seems a little off... <span style="color:#FFFFFF;background:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#00688B;">Oh no! emergency!   <font color="#080808">C <font color="#1F1F1F">a <font color="#363636">n <font color="#4D4D4D">y <font color="#636363">o <font color="#787878">n <font color="#8A8A8A">s <font color="#A1A1A1">o <font color="#B0B0B0">n <font color="#C2C2C2">g   <span style="color:#FFFFFF;background:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#CC1100;">Candypaw to the rescue!   21:24, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing. Darken the eye color a bit, it's too similar to the ginger transistion. 22:33, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white. :3 01:18, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just my computer? I don't see any stripes. Or do you mean the smudging of the ginger into the white? >w< Blur the earpink and highlight on the patch closest to the chest. Other then that, Inspirational ;w;. This is Gorgeous! ♔ S u n s p i r i t  ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 11:55, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's your computer - I can see the stripes clearly. 14:25, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I just changed her eye color to green because it never actually says what the color is. 16:27, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC) - Redone
Yeah...This is Spottedleaf and I have to say, I'm pretty proud of her. 15:15, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and darken the shading. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 15:20, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine in my opinion, I can see it clearly, however I darkened the ear pink. 15:29, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Everything is WAY too blurred. Make the other colours noticeable. 15:30, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 15:45, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make it like her apprentice image. It should be brown, not black, right? XD 15:48, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 18:15, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (W) - For Approval
Finally works! :D I'm proud of her, too. 15:29, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Original artist? Revisions done? The shading on the back near the shoulder looks really thick. Either lighten it, or thin it out. Make the earpink triangular. 16:30, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the color more like her leader/kit image(s). Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  16:45, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MCA) - For Approval
Changes aren't showing, and yes, I am aware the brown splotches need some more blurring. Can't say I'm proud of this one xD :3 16:17, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Original artist? Revisions that were done? Lighten the chest shading and blur/smudge her white chest. 16:23, July 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * Guh, I always forget that. xD Original artist was Shadowheart, it needed to match the description. 16:35, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Weedwhisker (E) - Redone
Uhg, his discription is so weird. x3 Anyway, original artist was Icethroat21 and his flecks needed to be smaller and he needed to be lighter. :3 16:19, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (L)- Tweaked
The original artist was Nightshine. All I did was add a scar on his flank. 16:31, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the scar, or at least change the location of it. I had to do a triple take to find it. 16:36, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I thickened it, since I can't move it. 16:50, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make it blend a little with his pelt. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  18:55, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (Kit) - Redone
Original artist was either Fawnstorm or Elorisa. Um...yeah, I added mottles to the paws, and since the tail was already short...I didn't make the tail shorter so yeah. 18:18, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

=Discussion Area= Use this area to post join requests, questions, and general discussion.

New Project
Please comment on this: Forum:New Project. 01:11, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join?
I don't now how to shade on MS Paint, but I'll figure that out soon so please can you add me as a kit until I know? I'm also a total drama fan by my siginature. Go Team Noah 03:34, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

A lead will add you in soon. :) I don't think you CAN shade in MS paint, but you can use Pixlr, or download Gimp (it's free and safe, don't worry). And sign with four ~'s. Just type four of them at the end of your post and it will sign for you. Very simple. ^^ ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥

And Sumopaint is good also. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC

Can I join?? I dunno how shade on GIMP. -- 01:33, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! Just wait for a lead to add you in :) You'll be added as a kit, not being able to post a charart until you've served for a month :) As for GIMP, I reccomend if you do not know how to use that, to use Pixlr, Sumopaint or even Photoshop :) 02:54, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at Ivyheart's Charart Tutorial and I figured out how to shade and I am getting pretty good!-- 14:37, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, can I join, please?
Hi, can I join as a apprentice, please? Amberfur 21:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Sure, you can join, just wait 'till a lead will add you in. But, you will be added in as a kit, kits can't do charats, but they can comment on them :) Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Hi i reaallyreally want to join. CAn i? Scarface9lives howl for the moon 14:12, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hi can I join PCA?
Hi Im Sparrowpool and I was wondering if I could join PCA Thanks! Sparrowpool 14:33, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Sure, but a lead will have to add you in. You'll be added as a kit, so you can't do chararts for a month and only comment on images. 21:10, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Okay thanks! Sparrowpool 22:05, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please comment on
this forum regarding setting up rules for the new chat room. 22:22, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Question about Leafstar's images
Ok, I know I put my question in the incorrect place last night, where nobody could see it, so I'm just making a new section for it. On the Nominations page, I had originally put Leafstar's images down as needing cream (I DON'T see cream anywhere on her images), and somebody chnged it to just needing cream stripes. I'm confused as to how she has cream on her: I mostly wanted to clear that up, because I'm doing her queen image, but it'll be hard to make it match if she's not tweaked for the right thing. 16:07, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

There are cream blotches along her haunch, her back, her fore-head, her tail, her stomach, and her left fore-leg. I really like how this is, the cream is nice and soft. I never pictured her with cream blotches patched all over her, I think it was supposed to be much more subtle Night Fall 19:14, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like brownish-ginger to me. Berrynose is cream. 20:17, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well it blends into her pelt more and it looks pretty cream against the brown. It doesn't have to be like Berrynose cream, then it would look kind of odd and stand out too much in my opinion. 17:13, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like highlights to meWildfire 02:34, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Not to me. Highlights are brighter tones of the pelt, but the cream here isn't at all the shade of brown. I think Rainwhisper is right, if we did each cat with the same color of cream, then they wouldn't stand out as individuals. I think every cat that has cream on their fur has a different and unique shade of it. I think she's beautiful as she is Night Fall 02:37, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, usually when a cat is cream and tabby it means that their stomache and muzzle are totally cream, such as the white on Billystorm. I think the character art is nice, but the cream is unnatural. 19:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I agree that they look like highlights. Maybe at least add a cream underbelly, chest, or muzzle, like said above? 19:03, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I just really hoped she gets tweaked soon, because while Tweak Week is going on and I can't submit anything, I want to try to get it as ready as I possibly can, since we have a lot of chararts to do, and I need the right cream color (fyi the cream on all her images ARE in fact different, so one has to be picked for all of them) 20:25, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Forum
Please comment on this forum regarding setting up rules for the new chat room. 22:22, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Talk Page
Something seems to be wrong with the talk page. Whenever I edit something, and I think this happens to anyone who edits anything on this page, all of the comments and things get jumbled together. So.. um, does anyone know what's going on? xD 14:40, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm having the same issue. I think someone's signature got messsed up. 14:46, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

That's what I think, because not all of the talk page is like that. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:11, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Questions:
Hello! I have a couple questions. First, when is Tweak Week going to end? Second, where is the list of chararts that need tweaking or being completely redone! Please comment. Thanks.  HA WK FI RE98  17:30, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

The Tweak Week nominations are here :) 19:16, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

August 7 ;) 19:18, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

It might go longer. We have a a lot of images left to be done, and i doubt we can finish most by the 7th. 19:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I would strongly press for an extension. If we keep going at this rate, we'll never finish. 20:08, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree with Moonflight. I've already done four chararts, and I still don't think that's enough. 20:16, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay so I'm not the only person thinking it should go longer. It would help if people nominated more warriors, and possibly make it so we can reserve 3 chararts at a time? Thoughts? 01:04, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

You should only make it three for the ones that can handle it. Heck, there may be some members that can only handle one or two. Although, three does sound like a good idea. Or, we could just extend TW an extra week or two. I can do as many as needed, but only within my skill level. 01:38, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hi.Im Sol988.I would like to join to make chararts.may i please join?

!!!It's Sol988!!! 14:35, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in, Sol988. Take a look at our guidelines and some tutorials to get you started. Also about Tweak Week, I think those ideas sound good. I looked at the list and we have a long way to go. x3 14:39, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:10, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I agree to extending Tweak Week, but how long are we going to extend it? The list is quite long, and a week or two may not be enough for some of the images needing to tweak (i.e. shading). Many apprentices I know are eager for Tweak Week to get done so they can work on their charart. It's a bit unfair to keep them waiting especially to the ones that have just become apprentices. As for the 3 chararts I think it would be a good idea, as people would know what they're limits are. Nominating more warriors would be good, but only if you think they're ready to tweak images. 15:50, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay i added a third colum to the reservation table, and got rid of the dates, because we dont need them really. I'm noit sure how long we'd extend it, we might aswell just wait and see how many are left when the time comes. 16:48, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good idea. I'm not sure why the date thing is even up there, since I don't think people chance it every time they reserve a new charart for TW. 17:01, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, plus there are a LOT of images to do for the Warriors App, Crookedstar's Promise, and The Rescue, so it's going to have to end some time. I do agree that sounds like a good idea, allowing warriors to have more images. By the way, as long as I DON'T edit the Pending section, can I go ahead and update the charart I have reserved? Just so it's here? 20:29, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think you can... We all know who had who. That won't change when TW is over. 20:32, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'll let people know it was reuploaded. 21:17, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, how long was Tweak Week last time? Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 00:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea, but I've been thinking...I KNOW there are a lot of images that need to be done, but at least those characters have images. There are many cats, such as Firekit and Beetlenose that have absolutelly NO pixils, and they need some. I do think that if the admins want it to be significantly longer that we should still be able to resume doing normal pixils. There are more chances for Tweak Week 00:57, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

May i join you?
hello, i know i came here to ask you a request to join your project. I will except any slot you have open for me. I would really like to join to help out with the warrior community. 20:01, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I was hoping you'd come join us, RoseStar! Anyways, a lead will add you in when they see this. I recommend reading the guidelines and tutorials if you need any help, or you can ask a senior member. 20:11, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in as a kit. ;3 21:38, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Images
Why are the changes on images not showing again? Is it because they're too many pictures on this Wiki? Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:14, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

New Suggestion
I had an idea after looking at the page for Sunfish, who is only ever given a description by her appearance in the manga at the end of Crookedstar's Promise. If a cat only appears in a manga or isn't described in detail in a book but is shown in a manga, can we go with the manga description? I know there would be color problems, but we could just set the charart to generic colors and put 'tabby', 'totoiseshell', 'mottled', or something like that on the page. Just a thought. 17:46, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

It depends on how the character is drawn. 18:39, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

How to get Approval?
hi I was wondering how I can get just a charart request from another user approved. Say if I requested one, how would the user i requested to get it approved. Thanks! 18:53, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Chararts you do for other people don't need to go through the approval process. =) 18:55, July 24, 2011 (UTC)