Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 181

Strikestone (K) - Approved
i'd appreciate it if nobody commented on the highlights, ill get to em (As well as any comments relating to it matching the other images, its the highlights and as i mentioned previously, ill fix them) 13:45, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

reup so i didnt solve the problem and i made it look more ugly heh... 13:54, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd for the warrior or my rendering of the kit? Some of the colors are deceiving. 14:00 Sun Jul 2

the file would be appreciated if i end up continuing with this image or just for future reference lol :] it'd be great if u could send it to qwert123d@yahoo.com. thanks man 14:31, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry, but until they get the file, the stripe color looks off.

I sent the files. Give Burnt some time on it. The warrior has a ton of layers to get through. 12:21 Wed Jul 5

reup  my emails not working f its china's stupid interent that cant agree with ANYTHING but 163 and baidu. so i might just reuploaded anyway in case i never recieve it- if i do ill upload accordingly. @homosneksual what do you mean? i dont necessarily need the file to match the colors or complete an image... ? it helps? but? 13:50, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

lol im dumb i had the reup tab open next to me as i was typing the message above then i forgot i didnt upload and closed the tab later xd. anyway i FINALLY logged into my email (sorry man its not one i check often) and fixed up a lot of things i didnt have on the kit holy shit that was more complicated than i thought... 14:52, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I ask that we do not swear on the wiki. Can you define the shading on the paws? 01:13, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

hh done 03:26, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The white looks more like it's on the chest, but he's described with a white belly.

reup the stuff on the chest is the color of his pale parts. i didnt have white on the belly tho so i added it 03:48, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Approved

Rushtooth (W) ~ Approved
I'm having trouble uploading these images now...anywho, here's Rushtooth! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:17, July 3, 2017 (UTC)\

Can you lighten the shading on the stripes or define them?

'''Re-uploaded. '''If it isn't showing, here. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:48, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the --> side of the tail

The stripes and base color of the df look lighter

I have the file for the df, so they're pretty much right. Unless Sunjaw thinks otherwise or anyone else? I can try color picking again to make sure they're right. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:49, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

The stripe color's fine, but the the base does seem darker. :) Mind sharping the tail stripes a tad?   04:00, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. I know there's some differences between the appearance of layer settings in PS and Sai but this looks the same. I gave Cosmo the file and the colors all came from that. 18:12 Tue Jul 4

Re-uploaded. Hope I got everything? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:27, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the closest front leg?

There's shading there, it's just the pale part which makes it blend in, but I'll try. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:02, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:33, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste near the top/tip of the tail

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:59, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved

Rushtail (RC) (Star) ~ Approved
Herein lies the image that depicts the story of a protagonist who tried again again and again but it still ended in a tragedy

Define shading depth on flank? 02:29, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

hello. please define the shading depth on that ear. jk everywhere 03:05, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 才不会呢！！

Hmm this might just be me, but the tail stripes kinda look like texture, could you try to make them curve and twist more? I hope you know what I mean

Re-uploaded They're like that on her other images, so I didn't honestly change it that much.

Define the eye depth 20:18, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The eye depth is fine; not sure why people are obsessed with having eyes be super super defined with coloring, but it's getting a bit nitpicky. You can clearly see there is variation in color here, which meets the requirements for the project.

I have noticed that the "eye depth" issue is getting a lot more common. I agree with Jayce that it is a nitpicky comment and should probably be slowed down unless an image really needs it. Also, can you define the shading? 01:07, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

CBA?

Approved

Fernpaw (TAQ) (K) - Approved
I'm assuming grey tabby Fernpaw is the one I'm supposed to do. Also tried smudged shading... I think I did good. 01:12, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful! One of your best works so far! Define the earpink in --> ear and lighten the shading some on the body on --> side? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:16, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dis is so cute! Can you make the shading cover more of the chest? I'm pretty sure there would be shading there. (As for which image you should make it's very confusing, because it says she's a gray tabby, but the alt is a gray tabby and *shrug*)

Yeah, looks like you did the right one, the images must be mixed up. Smooth the shading on -> paw

Reuploaded 14:09, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on <-- leg? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 14:39, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:15, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

add a little shading on <-- ear. 17:21, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't want to add too much because of the light source but I did add a little bit. 00:07, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved