Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=Tweaked= Take it to the tweak page

=Images Pending Approval= Please use this section to put images up for approval only.

Dusk Nose (Alt. Ki) - CBA
Light source is from above, if it's not clear. Gray is just such a boring color to look at, so I tried to make it less boring with an interesting shading tint :) 01:26, January 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:56, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading in the ears. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:11, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry to be a bother, but to me, it looks very green. I know you used a green tint to make it more interesting to look at, but it doesn't look gray at all. He looks like mint-colored to me. Could you possibly darken the tint or something to make the image not look completely mint? 14:47, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Reups  16:35 Thu Jan 21 

Please lighten the shading on the paws and expand the shading. 22:48, January 21, 2016 (UTC)

Define the face shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:38, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

reups  12:32 Tue Jan 26 

CBA?

Medicine Cat Blanks - For Approval
Thanks for all the votes!^^ I removed the whiskers,its easier to work on the blanks without them(will re-add them in the end) 20:16, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add the bridge of the ears onto them? Its the part next to the inside of the ear that has fur on it. You know what i mean right? 20:55, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Not all of the blanks have that, and imo, I don't think it's required. The rogue blanks, loner blanks, StarClan, and Early Settler blanks are prime examples.

Can you lengthen the back legs or shorten the front ones as cats generally have slightly longer back legs?

Well seeing as how the back legs are in the background and i think theres a little perspective going on here, i think theyd look a little smaller than the front ones, but they might need to be expanded a bit longer. Just a smidge. 21:32, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Lengthen the body a little more, and raise it a few pixels; everything from the shoulder back. 21:35, 01/22/2016

This look really nice. :) There's a bit of perspective wonk going on, though, I think. If the cat's torso is facing forward like that, I think the back end should be a /little/ closer to the front end, and the back end should be higher up with the legs longer, if that makes sense, with the stomach smoothed out. Also, thin out all the legs and smooth out the cheeks on the shorthair? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 08:16, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

Can you possibly make them taller to match the other blanks? 08:33, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

The size is fine, Icy. Size doesn't need to match the other blanks, I think.  13:32 Sat Jan 23 

Can you smooth out some pixels on the longhair as well? Some of it doesn't match the shorthair, and idk if it's required or not, but do the pixels need to match? 13:44, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean it doesn't match? I'm a bit confused? Are you talking thickness...? Because the shorthair blanks are probably going to be smoother than the longhair ones... and I think they match well enough, unless what you're saying is going right over my head.

Re.ups Uh,i made it horrible :p I do the longhair tomorrow 21:01, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Curve the rump a little more naturally and bend the front leg thats sticking out a little bit more like the longhair? Could you also make the back leg farthest from us bend a little more naturally too? The "elbow" should be a little bit more concealed since its on an angle, and could you make that same paw a little bit more round and a tad bigger? And also make sure the cheeks match up a tad bit more on the shorthair. 21:52, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Man, a lot of things do happen when I'm away. This looks amazing I would've voted for it myself. Well, anyways, correct me if I'm wrong but, couldn't the cheeks be a bit more connected to the muzzle. I dunno, I'm thinking of realistic looking cats.

The tail on the shorthaired blank has a rather pointy tip, could you perhaps make it more rounded as to make it look more natural..? 15:29, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

reverted Can someone give me a redline pls?I just can't make them lppk right :P 18:24, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

http://www.ezimba.com/work/160126C/ezimba11244531024400.png Here, hope this helps. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:44, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

Pebblepaw (RF) - For Approval
Meh. 01:34 Tue Jan 26

Define the tail shading a bit. I'm no expert at character art, but this is all I think is wrong. It looks lovely. Jaysnow (talk) 01:37, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you^^ 01:52 Tue Jan 26

I'm not saying you need to do anything, or if this even makes sense.. but in the book, it says "her white fur was dusted with brown speckles". Would this mean she'd need more white on her, since it's clearly making white the base? As it stands right now, she kinda looks more brown than white. Unless that's intentional... since the description from the allegiances could be taken either way.

Reuploaded I have yet to actually read the book, so I actually based it on the allegiances, as this is how I wound up interpreting it. I'm going to keep messing around with this, as I am not exactly sure how I want this to look now that I'm aware of this, so I put the white on a separate layer in case I cannot get a decent look to it and need to revert it. o.o 15:53 Tue Jan 26

Parsleypaw (App) - For Approval
I've been on a classic tabby kick lately, so Parsleypaw gets a classic tabby pattern. :P I'm pretty happy with this, though I might tweak the shading and pattern a bit later. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:07, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paws a little? Other than that, it looks terrific, Jayie! Jaysnow (talk) 06:11, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Could you darken him a bit? He is supposed to be a dark brown tabby, and this looks a bit lighter.

Reuploaded. And thanks. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 16:08, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Madric (KP) ~ For Approval
based this one off my old kitten muffin, rip granddad ears 06:46, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

(don't comment on the raggedness I only realised I forgot to add it after I uploaded it) 06:48, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define eye depth. and move --> that eyes pupil one to the left so he doesn't look crosseyed?? I love this *-* 13:25, 01/26/2016

Yay granddad ear cat. Could you define the facial shading and eye depth a tiny bit?

Cloudpaw (RF) (A) - For Approval
Let's play a game called "guess Jayce's favorite prefix". Is it obvious enough? 8D

Duskpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 16:08, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Could you desaturate the whole image? 16:14 Tue Jan 26

Also define the shading pretty much everywhere; I'm having problems seeing it.

Reuploaded. 16:21, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Hawkpaw (SC) (A) ~ For Approval
so comments? I know the ear pink looks a little bad. 16:42, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, as I can't see any at all.

Blossompaw (SC) (A) - For Approval
i think the shading needs lightened but I will fix it later. Also I need to rename it my bad. 16:43, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-named. Also, does this have stripes, or is that texture? I can't tell. Since she's ginger-and-white, she needs stripes. (some people have texture that looks like stripes, and stripes that look like texture, I apologize for asking)