Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Mist where Sunlight Shimmers - For Approval
well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it?? *santa pool*  07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --Rainwhisker 09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --  Icy -chan  20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  pool*  07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.-- Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also Sandy   Talk   16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --  Icy -chan  21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better?? *Ivy pool*  06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look right, make it look like this. Also, maybe make the end of the tail a little bit darker than the rest of the tail (just use the burn tool a couple of times), so that it shows the shading more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *angel's  bells*  06:38, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks need to be a little lighter. Other than that, great job! -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 12:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded i think it's strange...-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:24, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... the mud streaks look too green still and need to be slightly thinner I think. I'd personally use a size 5 brush and blur well. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:44, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

reploadedi started it all over... -- *Ivy jingle jingle!!* 07:40, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink, maybe try changing the ear pink to a lighter or darker color, or making it thicker. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:07, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:33, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

It looks to hot pink. When you're picking your color, go to the red, and choose a salmony color--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:47, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:59, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:00, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Swiftstar (L)-For Approval
Is he okay? Warriors808 22:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't bad but you need to blur the shading and highlights. you might also want to add some shading to his left side.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:08, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Are you even online? Great for your first try! Just do what Ashy said and he'll be amazing! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:22, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Also, he needs ear pink --Spottedwing 00:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The space right between his hind leg and his right fore-arm is white, it needs to be gray--Nightfall101 06:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his leg, it looks. . . smudged. And yes, add ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched for 7 days. Please work on it soon--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:08, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Night, Black hasn't been on because she was on vacation. She went to the cape. Anyways she's online right now so she'll upload it because she already had it done but it wasn't uploaded. Anyways Black, for the image maybe blur the earpink some more and the lineart on the leg looks....blurred. Fill that in black with the bucket tool and I think he'll be ready. Nice job for your first Charart. Oh and Night she works on these but she doesn't have time to upload them. She is always busy. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:32, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't know--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Gone on vacation or not, Icestorm, Nightfall was right to say something; if you're not going to be able to update the image for a while, either leave a message saying so, or withdraw the image but leave it reserved so you can put it up when you get back. Image-wise, make the nose color a light gray instead of a pinkish color, don't have the ear pink filling up the entire ear, just in the middle of the ear, and make the ear pink more like the color of Smoketalon or Graymist's ear.

Also, the shading still needs blurred a lot more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. She didn't know. She is only a newcomer. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blacktail called me and I told her what happened and she said she is re-doing this. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of... strange. Make it smaller, and less inward. Blur it a bit as well. -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 12:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. It looks too bright to me.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 08:57, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I'll TRY to fix it. I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BAD!at Chararts :( Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 22:14, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

DON'T decline this. I am working on it with the help of Icestorm and Minnowclaw. Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 13:06, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Just for fun when I was re-doing Swiftstar I made him into a long haired cat. Is that okay? Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 00:51, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

well, Swiftstar is a WindClan cat so I personally think it better if he were shorthaired. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:50, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

DON'T DECLINE THIS! Warriors808 just called me saying she's working on this and she is trying to blur the shading it's just she says it's hard. Could anyone like be her mentor? -- Pan dast orm Panda Love 14:28, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

try lighting up the shades a bit it really works

It's beautiful, I just love what you did with the eyes. I think the ear pink need to be blurred though. --Spottedwing 04:19, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

She needs help with blurring the shading. -- Pan dast orm Panda Love 23:36, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) - For Approval
My second charart. Comments? --  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is incredible! Just two things, first of all I think I can see a gray speck on his belly. And then (This might just be me being picky) but the face looks a little to dark. Maybe lighten up on the shading there?--Nightfall101 20:59, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Holly!!! I agree with Night that the face is kinda too dark. And maybe blur a little the shading and the pink in the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

i love it! although, i agree also, the face is a bit too dark and shade the ear. Otherwise, its fantastic! -- ♥Shine star♥  23:31, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks =). Better now?  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is looking good. But there are two spots where the shading doesn't connect with the lineart. Right on his butt, (yeah, I said it =]) And the bottom of his front right paw.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:07, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart looks as if it is blurred. Blur the fur, and lighten up a bit, especially on the paws. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The tail looks really dark. But I'm picky :)--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid this one, I hope it looks better now ^^  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is amazing! Just darken the ear pink a tad. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 16:13, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --  Holly... leaf or berry?

Look at the images for Cloudtail, Rippletail etc and use that colour. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:12, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --  Holly... leaf or berry?

Nettlepaw (a) For approval
My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? -- ♥Shine star♥  19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar ♥Shine ]] star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (MC) -- For approval
OK, Hollyleaf USED to be here, but I took her down since it wasn't her current rank. So Kestrelflight! Tell me if it needs to be more grey. and yes, I will work on the whiskers and make it full size. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!12:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see any highlights.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:51, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is good Maple, but it doesn't really look any thing like his apprentice picture. And highlights arn't required. Although, shading is, which I don't see any of. --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I see a little shading, but there definitely needs to be some more added. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:30, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Shading needs to be blurred more. Man, I haven't been on here for awhile!! Oops! I mean cat. LOL! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded OK, blurred shading (but I could do it more...) Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:15, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Looks better. Make the ear pink a little bigger though--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 12:01, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the herbs- they don't look realistic. You might want to color some yellow or brown and make them look like herbs.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 02:35, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:36, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

blurr the shading on the leg and neck.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maplefern Hi!13:32, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Nice siggie Maple! Blur the ear pink a little and perhaps add some more shading Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 16:03, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Chirp (Lo)-For Approval
Wow I haven't been on in a while! :) Here he is, Chirp! I just love that name...comments?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  11:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's pretty good. Maplefern 11:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a bit more pink in the ears -- Santastar Merry Catmas to all and all a good night! 12:12, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes really need blurred. --Bluestar1776 20:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did that help? P.S. This is my first Charart as a warrior! ^.^ -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:09, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good Mossy!! All I can see is maybe make the shading thicker, and what others osers said. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes just look to dark and "solid" to me... try running the dodge tool over them a bit, and blur them a bit more. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:43, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, thicken the shading (that's on the edge of the lineart, the shading inside the fur caused by the highlights is okay, but either brighten the highlights some more [only a little bit] or darken that other shading as well [only a little bit]), and blur the stripes a lot more. Glad you're back on. ;) These tabby stripes are awesome, by the way. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:37, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for 6 days... please work on it!! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 22:17, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry...CURSE YOU PREALGEBRA YOU ARE LITERALLY RUINING MY LIFE!!!!! Sorry, I have anger management issues. Will work on it soon.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded the burn tool is my hero :)-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:58, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

color the ear more,but AWSOME!!!my past mentor's past apprentice!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:08, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded Today is my dad's birthday.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  16:59, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (CG) - For Approval

 * I sort of darkened the shading a bit too much, didn't I? I tried to do it by looking at the tutorials.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the shading does look a little dark and bumpy. Lighten and even it. Good job though! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:07, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:05, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

nice work Lighting :) there are some white bits of color on the tail lineart, and back lineart. otherwise I lile this. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:00, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! Just a few things 1)The space in between his legs and paws should be gray, not white (See Moss that grows by river, or Night of No Stars) The ear pink and nose pink look purple. Try making them more of a reddish color 3)I see two white pixels on the tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:06, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink so it won't look so purple.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:05, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. Do the mud streaks look a little awkward?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * you have one white pixel on the tail still. as for the mud I've never done it before so don't know :/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:42, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I think that the problem with the mud streaks is that on almost every Tribe cat they're all the same thickness. Normally, they would be narrower at the ends. But, as I said, almost every image has mud streaks like that, so... Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink and the nose pink still look very purple--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:15, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:52, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

You still have a white pixel on your tail. But the ear pink and nose are better. Maplefern 11:44, December 11, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 11:55, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose need to be more of a rosy colour. Also, the mud streaks look painted on. Look at the approved prey-hunter stripes as a good example; these haven't quite been perfected on the caveguards yet. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:36, December 15, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is WAY to bright. It should be more of a samlon color. Darken it a bit. -- ♥Shine star♥  02:21, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


 * I lightened it some time ago, but then Sandy told me to make it a rosy colour, so that's what I did.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:02, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you should go to red (not the pink) and select a pink from there. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!

I know Lightning. I said rosy but I didn't mean bright pink. Look at... Rippletail, Cloudtail, um, I can't think of any more right off the top of my head but look at the aproved images. Sorry for the confusion. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:40, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 05:42, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Run the burn tool over the ear pink and nose pink, it looks hot pink. But it's getting better!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:06, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:19, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Tadpole (K) -- For Approval!
Hey, Tadpole's back! Since he still didn't have an image and Rainpelt's verson left, I thought i have a go at him. Comments? Hopefully, no concerns!! :) -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Maybe add some highlights,the lineart is a little hard to see.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:04, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

well, i was actually gonna post it again as i have become active here again, but i wont go ohez noez a lot, so no worries from me. i cant see shading, so make it darker, and add a bit more green to the eyes. &#91;&#91;user:rainpelt&#124;rainpelt&#93;&#93; 01:31, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not seeing much eye color... -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:01, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Um, Rainpelt, his eyes are supposed to be amber. Not green.-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded -- Don't know if the changes showed up... -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

his eyes gotta be hazel from what i see. hazel is a greenish brown rainpelt 00:16, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright, make it more of a deep red, and blur it a lot.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:16, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a while. Please update soon, or it'll have to be declined--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. I've been busy with homework and stuff. BTW, how can i make hazel colored eyes when on pixlr, I can only do a single color. Help!! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

What do you mean you can only do a single color? In pixlr, click on the color boxes, and you can change the colors with a lot of variety. (Does that make any sense?) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:16, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Rainfur(W) - For Approval
I really wanted the Firestar's Quest cats done, so I decided to do Raintail. I don't really know how the darker flecks turned out. Comments? Hidden -jimgle ♪  19:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Great work on the spots I think they should give it immediate approval. But his name is Rainfur. WoodClan 20:10, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, his name is Rainfur. I changed the title for you, and make sure to rename the image. It's no biggie, I get names mixed up too;) Anyway, the image is great, but I think the spots should be less round and more irregular. (Oh, and your signature is misspelled; the "Jingle" part of it has an m instead of an n. Just letting you know:) ) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 20:23, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Make the spots more irregularly shaped and placed.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 20:43, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I reauploaded the new Rainfur, so sorry that I wrote Riantail. I did the flecks more irregular with the help of teh charart of brambleberry. And than you, I hadn't realized m,y siggy said Hidden-jiMgle. Hidden -jingle ♪  03:05, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

They still look too regular. Look at other spotted cats for help.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:46, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder and haunch highlights.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:43, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-fixed highlights and fixed the spots. Hidden -jingle ♪  21:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Try making the spots different sizes, and some of them a lot bigger. Rainfur is flecked, Brambleberry is spotted, make them bigger and more like flecks, like on Weedwhisker. A flecked cat is basically like a mottled cat, so you could look at Lichen or Ashfur (TC) as well. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:14, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I made him flecked like the chararts of Weedwhisker, Lichen, and Ashfur. Thatnks for the examples Icethroat. Comments? Hidden -jingle ♪  21:17, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

My only comment is "Comments before approval?". :P -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:01, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Tornear (E) For Approval
Well, I figured Tornear needed an elder picture. What do you think? I tried to make the stripes look as much like his warrior image as I could. How is it?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I love the neck and below, but the head looks bland, add a highlight and some more shading over there.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:45, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better Minnow?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:42, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I love Tornear! He's so cool! And I love the way your tabby stripes turned out! But... Can you blur the shading on the tail? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:41, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys, please don't take this down. When I try to upload it, the changes don't show up. Don't worry, I'll get it fixed!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:06, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderpaw (A) - For Approval
Minnowclaw (my mentor) and I have been working on this for a little bit and she suggested to move it to here so I did. Comments? Suggestions? <font color="White" style="background:Magenta">Spottedhead The Shadows Are Rising! 23:19, December 12 2009 (UTC)

It is a good picture. The mentor-apprentice program is not on anymore, however. The lineart is blurred at the top of the front leg and the tip of the ear. Maplefern 00:29, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is touching the lineart, put a little gray between it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:12, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think that you over used the blur tool! On her back, the line art is blurred, and the ear too. Also, the eye is missing lines too. Fix that and you'll be good!!! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Speckletail - For Approval


The pale tabby queen who became an elder. My second cat! Please comment.--Night shine 05:47, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty dang good. The only things I can see would be to blur the tabby markings some more, darken the shading, and darken the ear pink. Onther than that, you did well. ; ) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:26, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Mumble said it all! LOL! Yeah, all I see is the stuff that Mumble already mentioned! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Hopefully I made it better ^^--Night shine 23:32, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Your picture automatically updates, so you don't need to re-post. Just reupload it. As for the image, personally I think the ear pink is too purple. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 23:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the ear pink color--Night shine 01:04, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I think Darkhallows had Speckletail reserved first--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:36, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Night shine, Darkhallows reserved it first and you aren't a member.

Shady's time limit ran out. The two weeks she had to do the image have been used up. I say again;there is no such thing as reserved. Night shine is perfectly able to do this image. Night is a member; check the list. For the image, Night, you need to add more tabby stripes on the chest and on the haunch and blur them in more. Also add some lengthen the shading and blur it into the pelt some more. -- Tinsel claw  22:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Isn't Speckletail a pale brown tabby she-cat?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:24, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is pale brown tabby. -- Tinsel claw  22:28, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know, it looks cream colored to me--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:43, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

she looks great to me!!good tabby markings and shading!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:10, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's really cool.--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Tinselbreeze ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:01, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) - For approval


I was surprised no one had made/reserved him when I did... anyway, he's been gathering dust in my files while I've waited for Snowfur to be approved (she just was!!), so here he is. I think I might need to darken the stripes. Comments? Concerns? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

His eyes are white, he may be blind, but Jayfeather does not have white eyes. Make them blue, please. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 01:46, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink appears purplish and the tabby stripes are too blurred. Feel free to ignore the marking part. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!02:03, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather already has a Mc picture by Dawnfeather-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes are way to blurred. And the highlights on his face look like cobwebs, as do the ones on his legs. Blurr them some more please. And yes, Bracken's right about Dawnfeather's picture. I don't really know if it's been approved, you'll probably have to ask Bramble or Sandy--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:38, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well, Jayfeather is still an apprentice on his page, and he hasn't been reserved by anyone. So I would think that ment I could do him. My computer is sick, so I need to get on my mom's to fix those things. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whilst Dawn's image was very good, it was never submitted for approval as far as I know and so has not been officially accepted by the project. This can stay up. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:04, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sandy. Anyway, I fixed the things you guys said. I had to save a new file because the changes weren't showing up. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink looks kinda, lopsided. Try straightening it more, and make it a little darker. Jayfeather is a tabby, but he hardly has any stripes. Try making them thicker, and adding more. Google a gray tabby for reference. But this is much better than before =)--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:13, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added more stripes and fixed ear pink. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Okay...can you add shading to the shoulderish part? Do you see where I mean? Just dodge tool it and then blur and it looks good!-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and less bright, make it more salmon-ish. And blur it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:53, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed ear pink and shoulder. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:49, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

the earpink needs to be blurred more and maybe darken his tabby stripes a little. I can't really see the ones on his body.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:42, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg's shading needs to be blurred a little more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  20:07, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to darken the stripes without making them too dark. Blurred leg shading and earpink. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:40, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Lionheart (A) For Approval
Okay, I know Ashfoot's queen image used to be here, but I deleted it so I could start over. That big hightlight on her stomach was bothering me too much. So here's Lionheart as an apprentice! Okay, I tried to make his tabby stripes like his warrior image. How is he? Oh and by the way, have any of you noticed that Lionheart's eyes on his charart turned green? I could have sworn they used to be amber! Oh well, I'm not really complaining I just thought it was strange. Anyway, enough of my rambling. Comments?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:58, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

It is a good picture, but read Bramble's caption at the bottom of the page. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, I'm giving people a week, remember? The image looks great, Nightfall. His eyes are green; page 29 of Into the Wild. They may have been mentioned as golden once; I'm not sure, but for now this is fine. I don't see anything wrong right now. -- Tinsel claw  22:10, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! I read your notice, and whipped him right up in one night! Oh and yes, I know his eyes are green in the book, but I meant on his charart. Did somebody change it? I'm sure they used to be colored amber. Anyway, is it ready for approval yet?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:46, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome; just darken the ear pink a little bit and it should be ready. (I'm back~!) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

awsome!!

Oatwisker (E)- For approval


what do you think? rainpelt 11:54, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Rainpelt, Lowbranch doesn't even have a description. We need to do cats with descriptions--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:45, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

look at the image summary. names are in a way, descriptions. Branch for one. and eyes often come from the mother. rainpelt 22:01, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

This is true but you still can't be sure.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Rainpelt, but without a known description we can't just give her an assumed one. Unless you can find another cat with a known description for this image, consider it declined. -- Tinsel claw  22:31, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

made it into an elder using same colors. rainpelt 00:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is very bumpy and uneven, please even it out. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 00:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED fixed that. rainpelt 00:37, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The glare in his eye is blue, it needs to be white--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:40, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOAGED added glare and ear pink. rainpelt 00:43, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The glare has to be white Rain, right now it's gray--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:00, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

it is. rainpelt 01:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

For future reference, the "glare" is the highlight (that's what we call it) and it is white, Nightfall. Rain (is it ok if I call you that?), just add shading on the chest, in between the legs, and under the tail. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 01:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. fixing other stuff as some guy in yougomaglaslafia speaks :p rainpelt 01:39, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry. I see that now. When you look at my computer screen from a certain angle, it makes everything darker, and it looked gray then.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:48, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

You need to change the file name and his page says he is a tabby.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval


Heheh, she's so nice. :-) One of the images is about to be deleted, so it wont be 36 for long. Comments? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:29, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Agreed. Poor Minty! Anyway, onto the image, I think you need to blur the highlights a bit more, and maybe lighten the ear pink. But, otherwise, she looks awesome, Mumble! -- Angelstar Silver Bells 19:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! I'll get onto that ASAP. ;-) -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 19:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I think Nightfall101 had her already! i swear! but this is good Mumble!--Echopaw 21:15, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm... I know it says she's a queen on her page, but she isn't really. If she needed an image, she would be a loner. She had her kits as a loner, and the term queen is only used in Clans, just as kit-mother is used in the Tribe. Other loner/rogue she-cats who had kits aren't classified as queens, such as Sasha. It would be different if this was like Daisy, who had her kits and then joined a Clan, but Minty never joined or will join a Clan. So I don't think she should have a queen image, but a loner image instead. Please correct me if I'm wrong. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:41, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I see where you're coming from Bluestar but the definition of queen is any she-cat expecting or nursing kits. As for the image it's really good but I agree with Angelstar.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome Mumble! But I do agree with Bluestar. I think she should have a loner blank rather than a queen blank. Oh and Echo, yes, I did have her reserved for a while, but I had never done a loner before, and when I tried doing Minty, it didn't turn out so good. So, I decided to let someone else do her--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I discussed my view on this with Bluestar; you can see on her talk page. The bottom line is that this is the correct blank; she-cat nursing kits or pregnant is a queen, thus she be used with a queen blank. Tinsel claw  22:22, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

When I checked nobody had reserved her...? I'm gonna take a look at the discussion, and decide what to do about the blank, but I think I might stick with the queen; A queen is really just a pregnant or nursing she-cat. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:44, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Blurred her more, kept the blank the same. Anything else? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of dark, but that's just my opinion. Ignore me if you think the color is good. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 16:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. I'll lighten it up a tad, as well as the shading. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 16:25, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Dapplepelt- For Approval
Well some images are in the 24 hour stage so I thought putting this up would be ok. Comments on my first tortiseshell?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:38, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

i see nothing wrong.... :D-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  08:00, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

It might just be my computer screen, but it looks as if the highlights could be blurred a lot more. Also, the way her tortoiseshell patches are blurred looks kinda strange. Especially the ones in the middle. And the ones along the lineart could use some more blurring --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:49, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well kinda. I didnt really like the first one so I made a new one and decided to see which one you guys like best.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:14, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I liked the color and texture of the ginger on the second one, but the shapes were a bit square.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:18, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I decided that I liked this one better. I added earpink and tried to fix the squareness of the patches. Comments?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 15:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The ginger looks too yellowish. Make it look more like the ginger on Robinwing (RC) or Olivenose. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:50, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

It looks yellowish because of the highlights. Should I darken them?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 14:53, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, try darkening them. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:07, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedDarkened.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 15:12, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Redstar - For Approval
Yes, I know it's the 39th image on the page, but it won't be the 38th for long. Anyway, I added a couple tabby stripes here and there because I felt like coloring a ginger cat the natural way:) Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 20:42, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is great! But the highlights are... a little bright, either that or the pelt is too dark, also, i can't see the shading very well. -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 20:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is much too dark, and you need to make a bit of distinction between the shading and the main pelt color and highlights. Right now it just looks like he's colored this way, with no shading. -- Tinsel claw  22:39, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the shading (I hope) and highlights. Better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 01:14, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The shading's still too dark, and I can't see the original fur color anywhere between the shading and highlights. Try lightening the shading and/or darkening the highlights. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:46, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened the shading more. Is it better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 18:48, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Husker (Lo) For Approval
I think this is my best image ever! -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Uh, some spots seem to have not shading, like the belly.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Mosspath is right. His belly needs shading, not his back. And if you want highlights, use the dodge tool and mark the shoulder and haunch. Blur too.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 03:19, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the yellow fur on his head looks, weird. I don't own any of the Graystripe manga books, but I've read them in Barnes and Noble. I saw Huskar's picture, and the hay colored fur on his head isn't behind his ears. I know this might be difficult to do, but I would suggest drawing a little tuft of fur on his head, and color it in ginger. And delete the one behind the ears--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:36, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The mangas are gray. Does it ever even say anywhere that the tuft of fur on his head is hay-colored? If it were me, it would make it a patch of either light or darker gray. -- Tinsel claw  22:23, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

It does say on his page that he has hay colored fur on his head. -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 23:10, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

An official confirmation. Husker's article is not official. It is very likely that some person just thought hay-colored fur, and put it in. Many people put in false descriptions. Unless you find somewhere a colored official picture of Husker, or a confirmation from Victoria Holmes, then turn the head tuft dark or light gray. Tinsel claw  01:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:20, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Right now the shading is too dark and needs to be blurred more as well as the highlights.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded, how's this? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 13:02, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Still, the highlights need to be blurred more. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 14:23, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? If it still is not blurred enough, please show me how much to blur it, because pixlr.com won't let me blur them more. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 14:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC) its a bit blurred...-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:47, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

You need to blur more. I'd advise you take out the highlights and just add more shading. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:05, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

A few things: 1) I can barely see the patch of gray, 2) The ear pink is too bright, make it more rosy, but less pink.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  20:02, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Fish Leap - For Approval


Yes, this is an ancient cat. I decided that since the ancients eventually become the Tribe, the cats in training to be sharpclaws would generally be classified as to-bes. They're never mentioned as anything but cats in training to be sharpclaws, anyway. Comments? -- Tinsel claw  23:04, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Your words confuzzled me, Bramble...but THI IMAGE IS STUNNING!!! XD-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:35, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

This is great Bramble. I was just wondering, are these the cats that would be softpaws or are they something different?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:01, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Darken it to make it a little browner and I think your right, why make a new blank for a cat who we don't even now who they are classified as.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 18:12, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Darkened. -- Tinsel claw  00:58, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) for Approval
well here she is!--Echopaw 21:03, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw, please put this as a full size image; it is hard to see. Also, this has too many images on it now. When some get approved, you may put this back up. -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:09, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I really don't know how to do that this is meh first charrie!--Echopaw 22:02, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

On the project page click on the image before saving it. This isnt bad for your first charart either.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:05, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing it again. Also, approval is spelled wrong. I fixed the title for you. Also sign with the four tildes ~ like that but four and nothing else. :) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:09, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED okay here she is!

Okay, just a quick q...what program do you use? I don't see any shading/highlights, and if it's Paint, there are no tools to make shading/highlights.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Pixlr.comEchopaw 22:34, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I thought I had Half Moon Reserved?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 00:37, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Ohh i didn't see:'C- Echopaw 01:35, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw had Half Moon on her list first, actually. You need to blur the shading, but other than that the image is well done. Tinsel claw  01:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED here she is i blured the shadings!:) --&#91;&#91;User:Echopaw&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:green; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;&quot;&gt;:D Santapaw ♥&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&#91;&#91;User talk:Echopaw &#124;&lt;sup&gt;&lt;span style=&quot;color:yellow&quot;&gt;&#39;Have a great Christmas!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/sup&gt;&#93;&#93; 03:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

good!!,but you need a siggie.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:14, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Me and my stupid siggy >:D --Echopaw 12:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw you dont need to upload a new version of the image each time. Also there are some gray spots in the background.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 16:43, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay i h8 saying reuploaded so here she is for the...4 time...IDK oh well any thing wrong with here? because this charrie being approved near christmas could be the best gift you could give(but charries and siggys would be nice but this would be better!) did i say to much? moving on is she okay!--Echopaw 17:09, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading again, mostly near the front right leg (her right) and there's some gray on the image, but I don't know if that's just my computer. If you don't mind, I can erase the gray spots for you. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I'm lazy but thank you blackclaw!':) I would not mind you doing that --Santaclaws is here! 15:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, the red's where the lineart's blurred, the blue is where the shading needs blurred, the yellow is where shading is needed and the green is where highlights are needed. Hope this helps! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:56, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Foxleap (W)-For Approval


I have to say, THANK YOU ICESTORM!!! :D I like this picture WAYYYY better than my Ryewhisker!!! Well, here is Foxleap!-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:17, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Well, this is good Moss, but two things. 1)The image has to be full size. 2) The coloring is wrong, Foxleap is red brown tabby. Right now it's just brown tabby. Look at his apprentice picture for help-Foxleap--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

It is the right size Nightfall... the colourig could be more reddish though. Apart from that, this is really very good. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:09, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded Did it change? Or is it still on the original?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  16:53, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) - For Approval
My first tabby. I did the best I could. I really want this approved by Christmas. Please! Comments before Christmas? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:28, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe more shading and some more stripes.-- Darkhallows 12:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink more, add more shading and blend, darken the tabby sttipes, and add more tabby stripes. Also, make them a little more wavy and not strait y's.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 17:55, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Wait I am too lazy to put the Reuploaded sign up. Wait I just did! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks messy. Blur it and add highlights to the head and tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Try adding some tabby stripes to the face, and make them less of a pattern of Ys but soe squggly lines, some Ys, and some little dashes in between the lines.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  20:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Um I don't get what your saying. Help? -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 21:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ice- For Approval
I know I'm exceeding the image limit, but I've been waiting a couple of days now for it to go down, and it hasn't. But since one image is in the "24-Hour-Stage" I thought it would be okay for me to post. Constructments? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 17:07, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, just add some shading on the back on the rear leg and make the claws and teeth go in different directions and not all in one. It just makes it look a little better, if you don't want to do it, then it's fine.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 17:53, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

It's no problem. =) I love doing Charart, so you can tell me to do whatever you want me to do to the image, and I won't mind. ;) -- Angelstar Silver Bells 18:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading? Also do what Minnow says and I think this is ready. :) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Add a highlight or move the shading back.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 02:52, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Speckle (Lo) - For Approval
I know, I've gone way past the image number, but I got my laptop back and I really wanted to have an image up, so here we go. I'll put Splash back up once the number of images on the page clears a bit. I'm not sure how this image turned out...comments and suggestions? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:27, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe darken the ear pink. But that's all I see right now. Does anyone else see anything? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Would she be classified as a queen because she is a she-cat nursing kits? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:34, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know if this is really flecked. They look more patchish to me, but I really like the image.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:35, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Aww, I completely forgot that she was nursing kits. Is there another cat this image could work for? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:45, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

She's still a loner. This can be her loner version, and the queen version can be done later. I would make this slightly like Lichen's image, with brown specks among the patches and white. Leave it as it is now and add to it. Tinsel claw  00:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I like Brambles idea, this is too good to go to waste! Just do the things said and this should be good. Also maybe darken the flecks, but the way you have it it might be too hard.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 02:54, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Do I put the brown specks on just the brown fur, or do I put them in the white fur, too? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:26, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (R)- For Approval
Well, I know this is past the image limit, but I will be busy and might not be able to post, so here. Comments?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:05, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! Just darken the tail a bit more, blur the stripes on the tail, and make the ear pink pinkish. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:06, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 02:27, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and ear pink more.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 02:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Icicle - For Approval
I know it needs work but I've stared at it so long I don't know what. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 18:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC) i think its nice but i think you need to make the eyes brighter ~iceyfang

White chest is too bright. Maplefern Hi!22:22, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I know that she is a pale gray she-cat, but right no she looks white. Darken the whole thing a bit.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 02:49, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Violet(lo)-for approval
oh no...am I exceeding the limit again*facepalm* sorry. how's violet? I'm using the Birchfall stripes again Constructments?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 05:57, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Well, it's very beautiful Bracken. But wouldn't Violet be considered a rogue? Her brother Snake has a rogue image, and Barley quit being a rogue when he left BloodClan to go live in the barn. But Violet never left with Barley. She became a kittypet. So, shouldn't she have a rogue blank, instead of a loner one?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:58, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I would think that Violet is a kittypet, but before she was a kittypet I think she was a rouge too.--Echoheart 12:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

The correct blank would be kittypet, since that's her current position, but since we don't have any kittypet blanks, the blank to make her image on would be rogue. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Are there any other loners this could be? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:07, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I already reserved her as a rouge!Hawkfire gave it to me to post up when she left.It's on the main page that i reserved violet.I have already made her,and I am currently waiting for a spot to pu her in '''FirePelt 17:16, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

AGGH, it's spelled rogue! R-O-G-U-E, rogue. Rouge is some kind of make up from France. I'm sorry, but I do so hate that common mispelling. Anyway, I don't know of any other loners this could be, and if Fire has already been working on a rogue version, this should probably be taken down. Sorry, Bracken, it's a really good image, but I don't think it'll work unless you find a cat with a similar description and make some color tweakings. Tinsel claw  23:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

you can try to turn it gray. They're alot of gray tabbys.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:18, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Millie(Q)- For approval
-- ok since whitewing is approved i thought i'd put up Millie. she is my first tabby! and i am quite proud of her. comments? <font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

Looks good. The thing is, The stripes should be thinner --Rainstripe c: 16:33, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, discounting the 3 discussion sections this just fits nto 35 images. The stripes need to be less cartoony; look at some aproved tabbies for reference. There are a few different styles you can try. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ears are too dark and need blurring. Sandy's right. The tabby markings are too thick, and could do with more blurring. --Birchy (I don't know how to get a signature!!)

The tabby stripes need to look more like Millie's stripes on her warrior image. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Shellheart(D)-For approval


My first official Char art. I like the way he turned out. Pretty Pretty c: Ready for approval! Comments? --Rainstripe c: 17:17, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

is it me or do i see a gray blurr on its chest ~iceyfang

Looks good! I would blur the shading, though, and the eyes need to have a glare and pupil. See Icethroat's tutorials for info on how to do the eye. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 18:08, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Bluestar1776.Blur the shading.I did the eye for you.(sorry if you get mad,I wanted to help you!) '''FirePelt 18:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt, you need to give users a chance to improve for themselves; this is Rainstripe's first charart afterall. Rainstripe and Iceyfang, please sign with ~. As for the image, it needs ear pink. Take a look at some tutorials for how to do this if you are stuck. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:38, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded with ear pink and more blur. --Rainstripe c: 18:55, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good, Ranstripe:D But, the ear pink should only be on one ear (the one that is on the side of the head that is facing us). --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 19:09, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded fixed ear pink. Ready for approval!!--Rainstripe c: 19:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

i still see gray on his chest Iceyfang 19:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Its shading. Durr --Rainstripe c: 19:31, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

No, I think I see it too, a paler grey - the shading should reach the lineart. Also, the ear pink needs to be smaller and a more rosy/salmon colour. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:34, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded. Fixed

Please remember to sign all of your posts with the four tildes(~). I see a shadow behind him. It shouldn't be there.-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 21:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded P: --Rainstripe c: 22:46, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

His back looks faded and that gray patch is still on the front of him.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:48, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Whole image redone. --Rainstripe c: 23:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

the eyes seem yo be life less can give the eyes a puil Iceyfang 23:59, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Can I please join the project?
Yes, may I please join Project Charart? --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 17:50, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Sure thing, Lonewolf. I'll add your right into the member list. Tinsel claw  22:31, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - For approval


I have no clue where he went, so here he is again! xD -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

nice job Iceyfang 00:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Tess - For Approval
well the page died down so here's Tess.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:49, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Splash (Lo) - For Approval
Yup, as soon as the image number dies down, I just have to fill it up again by adding another image. :P Anyways, here's Splash, back up for approval. Comments and suggestions? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:58, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good...all I see is that maybe the white part at the belly is kinda too poity at the top, mayeb make it more natural with a curve or something. But that's just my opinion. Hidden -jingle ♪  00:23, December 21, 2009 (UTC)