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Mothwing (E) ~ Under Evaluation
Well, here it is. =) -- 03:05, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

You're better than me! DXX define the tail shading more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:17, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make it match the other images. 04:22, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I defined the tail shading. -- 04:24, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define where the ear pink is. It's kinda...like one giant blotch. Make it more triangle and define the overall shading.

Yes, I'm going to be that person, but I don't think she should get one. Being in the elder's den does not make her an elder. She wasn't retired, she was temporarily dismissed. If Dovewing and Ivypool were staying in the apprentice's den, does that make them apprentices? If Briarlight is staying in the medicine cat den, does that make her a medicine cat? And let's not forget about Brightpaw, who stayed in the elder's den as well. Show me where it calls her an elder and I will accept this image. Until then, I don't think she needs one. 10:43, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I redid the ear pink and defined the shading. And Loonie, I believe that concerns regarding the position should go to PC's talk page. -- 13:55, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Add a little more depth to the eyes. 15:15, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added depth to eyes. -- 15:18, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

All right, then if I have concerns about it, this image shouldn't get approved until said concerns are dealt with. Fair enough? 18:57, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

The stripe pattern doesn't quite match. Define the shading, too.

Your concerns should have nothing to do with whether or not the image is approved until the time comes when your opinion becomes the status quo. If your concerns pan out in PC and it is agreed that she was not an elder, despite being dismissed by Mistystar, told she'd be an elder, and sent to the elders den while Willowshine stood as the sole medicine cat, then the image and info can be removed from the article and deleted. That should not stop the progress of this image. 19:30, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oookay so I've been looking through the book and it turns out there is a point where Mothwing is called an elder. "As an elder, you will be well cared for." It's in chapter six, not nine ten, but there is a cite nonetheless so I drop my argument. 19:37, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:45, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also make it a little less pink?

Reuploaded -- 23:31, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern still doesn't quite match, also can you define the earpink? This is beautiful. 23:33, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define and smooth out the shading and lighten it. Make the stripes thinner. 23:33, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 23:41, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern doesn't match the MC. She has a sort of rectangular layout of stripes, and they are much thinner and sharper. 05:59, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 06:14, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

They need to be a bit thinner. This is gorgeous, Starry<3 13:07 Sat Sep 15

Blur the shading a little. This looks very good! ♫Purplemoon♪ Tonight's A Blue Moon!  13:15, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 15:43, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and thin out the tail shading. 15:49, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 16:06, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading on her limbs  18:36, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more and the tail shading still needs to be thinner. 18:39, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- 18:30, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

It still doesn't quite match the other images. 03:37, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Starry, do you want me to take over? 06:10, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Not yet, Shelly. Duck, how does it not match the other images? -- 06:13, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

The color is a little off, and it needs more stripes. =3 11:42, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the stripes. 07:46, 19, 09, 2012

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Reuploaded -- 00:20, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it just a tad more. 11:32, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Well done, Starry. 83

Bluestar (Alt L 4) - For Approval
It's cited, if you see waste, it's probably an old version, I uploaded it then saw it, then I killed it. Here's the current one. Comments? =3 12:29, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the chest highlight and fill in the white pixel on her paw and tail. There's more on the little patch of fur between her legs. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 13:12, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I also added the scar since I forgot that before. owo 20:20, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the entire image. Also, thin out the scar toward the edges, like the one on her other images, and blur it just a smidge. Excellent job, Duck. Another wonderful image.

Re-uploaded Thanks 8DD 23:57, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shall we go CBA?

Define the shading a bit and lighten her just a tad? (I think her kit should be lightened a bit too...) 22:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:57, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on her haunch a little? 23:49, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:59, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Add/define the highlights. 07:49, 19, 09, 2012

Re-uploaded 12:08, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Now tone them down a little so they contrast better with the shading. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:17, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think they're fine, but if another person agrees, then I'll change it. 12:22, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a whole lot and add some depth to her lower front legs. 21:19, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Add some highlights (or non-shaded parts...) to the legs.

Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :)  00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Mudfur (Ki) - For Approval
Wow I hate these blanks it doesn't match in the slightest. Sorry for taking so long. 11:32, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the mottles? This is so cute! 11:34, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on --->this side. Cute Mudkit is cute ^3^  12:07 Thu Sep 20

Can you blur the neck shading? D'aaaw, wittle Mudkit. 00:02, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs just a tad. 20:56, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

This was my first every charart i ever made. I am still wondering how to do the collar and dog teeth reinforcement claws. I think i did an okay job. A little too much shading i believe. But tell me what you think. --BluestarXOakheart (talk) 01:45, September 23, 2012 (UTC)BXO