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Berrynose (D) ~ CBA
definitely has issues; gonna tweak that when i have time (probably tomorrow)

Reuploaded or today

I feel like the texture is more overlapped in the other images and it seems too linear here? I used a mixture of darker and lighter texture overlapped repeatedly for the alt kit. 00:41, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded thank you for file

Maybe add a little bit more depth? -- W i n d s o n g   (talk)   09:25, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? 21:28, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt W 2) - For Approval
Matched colors/stripe style to manga. -- 23:10, October 30, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes end in a point? 00:42, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:12, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:54, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

I realize you're trying to copy what's shown here, but could you possibly make them slightly more solidified? As they are, it looks just like random scribbles. However, in the panel below what's shown in the image on her article, the stripe that we can see appears to be more like a stripe and not as scribbly. I have the same issue with this one..., the stripes really should not be as scribbled on as they are and a bit more uniform. ​​​

Reuploaded -- 00:19, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you taper the stripes more to a point as well?

Gonna make the argument that perhaps this is what you should be aiming for - scribbled, yet solid, because I concur with skye, but we also need to match the image. That's her one for this from the german wwiki (mine) btw.

Reuploaded There are some days where I can't stripe.. -- 15:36, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes end in a point? 04:08, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mother..knows..best Oops, this is what happens when you hear Tangled in the background when making art. -- 04:15, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Turtlecrawl (W) - For Approval
Hmm. All colors from Jayie's psd of the apprentice. ​

Re-uploaded. Forgot the stripes. ​

Can you smoothen the chest shading? It looks rather blotchy now. And on the apprentice, it appears that the ginger patches are less present on the muzzle, notably the chin is mostly black. And the color that is on the chin on the apprentice appears cream rather than orange, but you have the file, so i may be wrong. The ginger patch below the left eye should also be wider, more triangular-shaped. The ginger also appears less saturated than on the apprentice, but it if you are colorpicking from the file, it could be shading throwing it off. Sorry for the paragraph!! 16:59, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for comments I got before I saw this. Also, I'm not tweaking the colors, as they are directly from the layered file. It's just how Jayie shades, and I cannot match that to save my life. The colors for this are actually not what they appear to be. I'll go fiddle with it again for your paragraph though.

Re-uploaded. I should also probably say here too that there's a color palette included with this file, so I do know everything matches. Jayie's known for intense highlights and shading that I'm not able to mimic properly.

Stonepelt (W) ~ CBA
22:07, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

There's a block of waste by the corner of the tail. -- 22:15, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 23:06, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorrelstripe (W) ~ CBA
22:07, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Flutterpaw (A) - For Approval
hi im backkk and of course i have to start my return with my son, all colors from his kit. i think im just a tiny bit rusty hhejajshdf ill get back into the groove again soon enough im sure but excuse anything kind of bad for now Squidward Plays  All  Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 01:21, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe dull the shading tint? It seems to mask all the white and making it appear cream a bit. 21:33, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

reups is this better or should i adjust it some more? Squidward Plays All  Star. I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:21, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Flamepaw (TC) (Apprentice) - For Approval
this guy is my son now 01:27, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you dull the highlight (?) lighter texture a bit; they seem to overtake the base and making the image lighter overall than the kit. The eyes also appear more amber/saturated on the kit as well. 02:53, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded the eye color was colorpicked from the kit image, i dont know why the wiki is dulling it...i tried to fix it a little bit : ( 03:55, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Would you like the file for him if wikia keeps being a butt?

yea if u don't mind! i think it's fine for now though unless someone says something 21:19, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

just in case, I'll list the hexes here; base is #171514, and the texture is the same colour set to multiply @ 33%. Earpink is #624A45 and the nose is #230D05, and the base eye colour is #E35B22, with a dark blue to add depth. Hope those help! I used a dark blue for the shading as well, in case you wanted to match the tint at all~ :D

Poppycloud (W) ~ For Approval
to pay or not to pay for that first season of got

Remove the shading on the <--- Eye? Also I just have to say im LOVING The Squirrelflight Loner Art! Moo (talk) 08:04, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

There's a line of waste underneath the tail. 21:42, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

re-up thank you moo!

Squirrelflight (Lo) ~ For Approval
yeet

Is it possible for you to sharpen the stripes just a little bit? They're a little less blurred on her other images. It's not too much, though.

Oakheart (Alt.W2) - For Approval
fox coloured alt which I'm assuming is still valid?

Mudfur (Alt W) - For Evaluation
Here's my charart for Mudfur:



09:49, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles don't quite match. They're too overblurred and need to be sharper. Try looking at the old warrior for a reference. -- 13:33, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Adding on, here are some references: this and this. -- 15:40, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

His eye color on his other images seems greener, and darken the earpink. 17:47, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

There is waste floating all around the image. Remove the texture, the set doesn't have it, and define the pale belly. The mottles look better but some on the flank still don't quite match. They should be more rounded and there should be tiner specks mixed in as well. -- 23:02, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add depth to the shading and add shading to <--- that ear. 01:48, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:02, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded removed some waste 10:13, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to < ear <span style="color:#ff6eb2;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 6px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,#0264ab);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif"> You captured <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,#6e47b2,#8e4dff,violet,hotpink,mistyrose);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif"> my heart  10:24, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:56, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles seem too rounded and uniform compared to the alt star. -- 13:08, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Wrenpaw (A) ~ For Approval
23:04, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Hopwhisker] (W) ~ for approval
i dunno 00:55, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Creekfeather (Alt. A) - For Approval


I think you forgot the whites/lights in the eyes. 04:07, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Nope, I didn't. They're at the bottom of the pupil. -- 04:10, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

With this blank, they're really only meant to go in one place. Eye style is usually artist's choice, but at least on this blank, there's really only one place that they're designated to go. ​​

Should I move them or should I keep the eyeshine as they are? -- 04:19, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

As I just said, this blank only has one spot they're meant to go. Please move them to where the blank has the spot for them. ​

Reuploaded -- 04:23, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Kitescratch (W) ~ For Approval
had a break but i'm back now for the time being. activity will continue to be spotty because of school <span style="font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-family:&quot;Comic Sans MS&quot;;font-size:15px;"> W i n d s o n g  <span style="font-weight:bold;font-family:&quot;Comic Sans MS&quot;;font-size:10px;"> (talk)   13:45, November 3, 2019 (UTC)