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Ratscar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
All I did was add the torn ear and scar, of which came from the warrior. OA was Silver. Comments?  11:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and make it more pinkish? It looks gray right now. 15:36, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:53, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to complain about something that you just fixed, but could you redden the earpink? It looks too pale to me.... but the rest of this image is positively beautiful, really! :) 00:01, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

If it gets anymore red then it will be hard to see against the base coat. I think it's fine. 03:24 Thu Jul 5

Re-uploaded Thickened the scar...I thought it didn't match the warrior's very well o3o  11:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken it a bit more? :3 03:30, 06, 07, 2012

Enlarge the earpink and possibly make it the same color as the scar? 22:44, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be longhaired. Sorry I just realized a small part got cut off. Don't worry, Ivypool is next. Low battery, sorry. 21:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on her chest. 22:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Her tail looks sorta flat...could you define/remove some shading...or add a "highlight"? OwO 22:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the body shading. 03:59, 04, 07, 2012

I say while this is up, the ear-pink closest to us should be blurred a bit, (Unless its my lap top). -- 08:57, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random black dot on her right paw... 00:02, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

That random black dot is lineart. However it does seem to be too thick. 02:15, 05, 07, 2012

Reuploaded Well, I managed to find her old .xcf so I redid what I've already previously done with this tweak. In all honesty, it makes me life tons easier. And if this is the correct version, then yes I see the waste and I fully intend to kill it  02:25, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

She's got a little waste by her paws, and in front of her tail. 20:56, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I already had pointed that out and said I'd take care of it  22:07, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks a bit flat - can you darken it? :3  22:45, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:17, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mistyheart, with a failed tweak by me. I re-did the shading, because let's face it; that last one sucked.

If you redid the shading on a solid cat..... how's it tweaked. 0.o 01:18, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Oh it was your image. Nevermind. Blur the shading then. 01:19, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

And add a light source. 01:28, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ....

Blur the shaing on her stomach and shoulders. 20:49, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it. Otherwise, I'll get told to define it again.

Can you define the haunch shading a bit? 23:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, actually. ^^;; These white cats are a pain as it is...

You won't get told to define it again, please blur the stomach shading. 20:44, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't blur it anymore. I also lightened it.

Define the tail shading a tad. Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:04, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Thrushpelt (W) - Tweaked
It looks redone, but I swear on my life that it isn't. Anyways, OA was Sandy with a re-do by me, and I redid the white patch, shading, fixed the earpink, and I added a fur texture. don't kill me, I like the texture  Comments for improvement? 22:21, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste under his butt. 22:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up th:e texture just a tad and define it on his tail. Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:03, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded:  01:07, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the fur texture more? It seems like he is two colors now. 01:57, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also make the actual lines for the fur smaller and add more? He looks mottled to me 02:39, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

And darken the overall shading as well. 23:18, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink if you want. o3o 23:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Ear pink's fine, but I redid the fur texture (too. many. times.), darkened shading, and I had to redo the white patch because it wasn't white with the texture. Also, please don't tell me to define the texture on the tail. It's /very/ hard doing it on a short-furred tail, and it won't show greatly even if I define it. 01:11, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) ~ Redone
Willowpelt! In icon for half of the wwiki shippings! ...Anyway redone because of blotchy shading. OA was Leaf-storm and someone before but I don't know. Comments? 01:01 Fri Jul 6

Blur and lighten the shading. 01:05, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes might not be showing. 01:17 Fri Jul 6

Blur the earpink just a tad. Lovely~ 01:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D 01:38 Fri Jul 6

Blur the shading a liiittle bit. 01:39, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Photoshop won't let me blur it anymore :/ 01:43 Fri Jul 6

Can you lighten the tail shading a little, please? 02:38, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Kinda new to this shading style x.x 02:47 Fri Jul 6

Smooth out that area between the front and hind leg. If it won't let you blur it anymore, try alternating between a very soft brush and eraser. Breeze whisker  04:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:21 Fri Jul 6

Blur the earpink a bit. 23:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Merp I think the earpink is fine o3o;; 23:32 Fri Jul 6

Lighten up dat shading. 00:20, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:00 Sat Jul 7

Define the shading some. Looks too close to a gradient now IMO. 20:43, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ._. 21:41 Sat Jul 7

Heavystep (A) - Tweaked
Ugh. This is frustrating me so much. I just cannot make this guy look three-dimensional. Anyway, I tweaked his shading to make it look less flat. I tried to smudge the stipes more to match the other images better, but that just looked worse. Comments would be much appreciated. ;n; Breeze  whisker  04:35, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a bit more. All hail Heavystep~

Define the earpink. o3o 23:28, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly add some depth to his eyes? 19:47, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Personally, I like the earpink on this one. x3 Breeze  whisker  15:39, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Adderfang (W) - Redone
Multiple issues. OhmygodI'msoproud<3 OA of the most recent version was Cloudy. Thanks to everyone who watched the join.me! I don't think changes are showing; look here. 21:35, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I know you worked hard on this (I watched) but you need to lighten up the shading a little bit. I can barely see the pelt where the shading is. Other than that you may want to darken the ear-pink, but that´s just me. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  22:19, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading's fine, Sandstorm. 22:22, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty! Just an opinion, feel free to ignore, but maybe thicken the shading just a touch on the shoulder/neck 23:11, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Thanks though 8D 02:18, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shading needs defining and blurring on the shoulder. This is really pretty. <3 Breeze  whisker  05:32, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Is it me or did part of his ear get cut off? o.O Skt Omnia vincit amor 14:06, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Breezy :) Skt, it's just you... o.o 14:55, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a bit. 20:09, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

I see it too. The tip of the far ear looks flat. o.o 20:23 Sat Jul 7

Re-uploaded. Ah. You're right 8D 05:00, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to darken shading, define earpink, and blur facewhite. OA was some crazy person. 23:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and define the shading. 23:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:47, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white on the muzzle some more. 18:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hate the shading with a firey passion. I miss GIMP :( 21:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights(?) and the shading looks flat, try defining it more. 22:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading since they seem blotchy. 00:47 Mon Jul 9

Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her front leg. 19:34, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Tweaked
Had a weird light source, so I just redid the shading. OA was me. Changes aren't showing yet. 01:29, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.

Shrink the earpink a bit. 20:06, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the tail shading and I think the earpink is fine, but if anyone else agrees, I'll change it. Changes aren't showing. 22:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mossfire (W) ~ Redone
Was redone for shading and smudge issues. OA was Hiddensun with a redo by Mistystar139. Skt Omnia vincit amor 02:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the ginger a little more. 02:42, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ginger's fine... 02:46, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the fur texture so she doesn't look mottled? 03:18, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink just a touch and thicken the shading around the belly. And, this is just a style opinion so feel free to ignore, maybe add a bit of white, she's giving the impression of a black and brown cat rather than a tortie. 03:48, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded. I tried to do it without the white, but it always looked dumb, so here. Skt Omnia vincit amor 07:25, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Slightly define the shading... but this could just be me. 04:14, 08, 07, 2012

I think it's fine, but if anyone else brings it up, I'll change it ~ Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:13, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
This was redone for the same reasons as the warrior. OA was Silver. I feel bad doing this one ._. Skt Omnia vincit amor 08:03, July 7, 2012 (UTC)\

So much better <3. Define the values in the eyes a bit. 12:18, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail shading. So pretty<3 21:12, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and blur the haunch shading. Nice textures, Skt! Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   22:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink matches the other images, Sand. it's fine. ^^;;

Bluestar (A) - Tweaked
Lovely Teldy gave me the file, so it was an easy tweak. Colors are from the warrior/deputy now, so I'm not changing them. And the lineart's from her alt apprentice. So pretty much the only thing touchable is the shading. :P OA was Teldy and it needed to match the other images. Comments? 21:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:26, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done 21:37, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel or two of lineart sticking off of her torn ear. 05:40, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean? The torn ear's from the alt. apprentice. 01:00, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Otterheart (W) - Redone
More or less redone. OA was me. Shading made me wanna gag. Comments? 21:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and define it 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

This is the same earpink I use on a lot of my warrior images.... just copied and pasted. I think it's fine, sorry. 00:59, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Willowpelt (A) ~ Tweaked
Well, wouldn't you know it? Apparently this is one of mine that I forgot I did. xD So, it turns out I could tweak it instead of redoing it. All colors come from Mounty, so I'd rather not change them.

Define the shading and blur it on the haunch. 05:39, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eww.

Define the face shading a little more. 18:01, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if others agree, I'll gladly change it.

I think the face shading looks fine, but could you blur the shading near the base of the tail? :3 18:51, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you lighten the haunch shading? 19:49, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Pinestar (Alt. L) - Tweaked
Oh... That looked so much better in photoshop... Anyway, shading and highlights needed to be tweaked. I also added depth in the eyes. 02:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. 04:59, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his legs, maybe? Breeze whisker  05:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:02, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his tail and chest. 19:32, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (DF) (W) ~ Redone
OA was this super duper amazing person and my favourite Canadian ouo;; Needed to match the rogue. All of the colors and opacity are the same as the rogue. Comments? 08:52 Sun Jul 8

Blur the earpink. ouo 14:11, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it has to be renamed Sparrowfeather (DF).warrior.png because it isn't showing up on the page. 16:16, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Favourite 8DD I love youuu <3 And yeah, she's right; I even put that on the nomination page. Maybe blur the scar closest to her eye (but not the one on her eye). 17:22, July 8, 2012 (UTC) 17:22, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded D'aaww I love you too Loonie <333 And I know it's supposed to be renamed, I'm going to bug Atelda about that when she gets back from her music camp. 19:23 Sun Jul 8

Blur the light part on the paws a little. 19:53, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:57 Sun Jul 8

Foxleap (Ki) - Redone
Arg. *has seem to lost all tabby skill* I tried to match the warrior the best I could x-x OA was Brightfrost with a redo by me awhile ago. Comments? 14:33, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and maybe lighten the pelt just a bit. 14:36, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:49, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 15:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''This pelt color makes it hard to blur earpink, and keep it noticeable. e.e 15:10, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a little bit more. Try to make it match the warrior. 15:23, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The shading was making the pelt color dark, I'm guessing. I color picked all the colors of the warrior. I ligthened the base up a lot. 18:46, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and define the shading on this > part of the body. 00:52, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Adderfang (D) - Redone
Same as the warrior. OA was Thistleshine. Everything's the same as the warrior besides the tail, which should match anyway. 19:09, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't match the warrior. 19:31, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it's the same. Both images are exactly the same, as Loonie pointed out; I watched her do the image. I just think that the shading might be darker on the warrior. 19:48, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No, he's right xD I forgot that I'd brightened the highlights on the warrior. Changes, y u no show? 19:52, July 8, 2012 (UTC)