Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Broken Shadow (KM) - Tweaked
Darken the shading, OA was me 01:07, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit or tone down the highlights please. =) 02:48, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

The coloring and stripe pattern really doesn't match the sharpclaw very well... Also, lighten the shading.

Blur the shading and I think there's some blurred lineart on the arm closest to us. Also, you forgot the the white paws. Define the depth in the eyes too? 21:12, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Will anyone throw a fit if I just redo it? 22:08, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. I certainly won't. Go right ahead, Scar.

Re-uploaded Wahhh!!! Don't look at it! It's ugly!  02:00, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's not ugly. Maybe blur the shading? Crys tal  hea  rt! ❄  05:08, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think that the shading's fine, beautiful btw Scarlet. 05:10, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

No I agree, it should be blurred. Also, lighten the paws a bit. 01:33, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:43, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think the base pelt should be a bit brighter to match the SC. owo 12:00, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the shading on the paws (especially the back paw) makes them look kind of orangy-brown. 14:19, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from the sharpclaw 00:10, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

The paws still look orangey. And could you tint the shading red or something? Black (or near black) shading doesn't work all that great on ginger cats. 03:21, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cloud With Star in Belly (E) ~ Tweaked
So I tried making her pale gray, and I defined the shading. OA I believe was 'Teldy. c: ew she looks ugly and blotchy 22:29, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Possible blur the shading and make the earpink less red and mre pink. =) 23:55, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the highlights? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 15:30, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

And tone them down, please 04:15, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Also lighten the base pelt color. It's too dark.

Reuploaded Blurred the highlights and toned them down, lighten the shading a tad, but I don't think it needs blurring... And are you sure about the base color? I tried lighting it a bit, but it would always look too white. (I also just decided to redo the earpink, if that was okay) 23:52, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink still looks quite red and smudge it a bit more. 01:35, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Well, she should be pale gray, like One-eye perhaps? Also, blur the highlights.

Reuploaded Blurred the highlights, made her lighter, and I smudged the earpink more. Sorry, but I still think it looks pink. >.<  02:38, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mosskit (Ki) ~ Redone
OA of the most recent version was Ivyheart, I think. Had multiple issues and would be better off redone. Don't ask me to darken the gray, as she's pale gray and white.

Aww! She's so cute! <3 Darken the shading on the tail and face a touch and maybe darken the ear-pink a touch 04:43, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Scar<3

Do images have to be the same pelt length? Cause the other image is shortfurred...idk... 09:55, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I don't quite know. I think I've seen images as different pelt lengths before. Plus, I think that image needs to be tweaked anyways. And since both of her parents are long-furred cats... I just kinda did that.

It's not really all that natural to have a gray cat with white patches, you think you could reverse her pattern? Also, yes they're supposed to be the same fur length, and I think the other image is fine right now... 01:32, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the front legs? 00:21, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think it's fine. If someone else disagrees with me, I'll fix it.

No, I agree. Maybe define all the shading actually. 03:19, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Stick (W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for the same as the rogue...I tried with the colour... 02:53, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a little more raggedness to the tail? o3o

Re-uplaoded. I dunno about the tail, the raggedness is in the same place, I just think the rogue looks more ragged because of how the tail is on that blank. o3o 04:57, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Well, raggedness doesn't always have to match. Especially since they're two different ranks at two different timespans.

Re-uploaded. Raggednes for all 22:42, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined a bit. 19:35, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 11:50, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart(Ki) - Redone
Redone for color, OA is the wonderful deputy Cloudy. I got all colors from Scarlet. Comments? =D 03:18, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripes. ^^ 03:26, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:52, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a touch more. Nice job Duck :3 03:57, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading.

Re-uploaded 04:15, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Just saying. I'm not the OA. I believe Wildheart was the OA of this file.

Whoops, sorry I just saw that you uploaded last. x3 14:20, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading, and tint it a bit red like I said on the apprentice. 22:19, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:15, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart(A) - Redone
OA was Ivyheart. Comments? I don't like this owo 03:25, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

It looks nice, but the markings, particularly on the haunch and tail, look like they're ON TOP of the pelt rather than PART of the pelt. Can you blend it a little more? sorry if I'm not supposed to be commenting; I placed a rejoin request on the page, so if I can get back in, I won't feel so bad about critiquing o.o Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 03:27, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

You can comment regardless of whether you're in the project or not storm. :b It's just tweaking you need to be a member for. Tint the shading red a tad, and darken and define it. 03:30, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:37, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste around the image Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 04:40, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Some of the stripes seem sorta blunt compared to the kit, maybe sharpen them a but or something? 12:49, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:20, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the last of the waste that I saw. owo 14:52, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on ---> side please. 19:34, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if another person agrees I will. x3 19:42, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink looks fine in my opinion... Can you make the tip of the stripes more.. Pointy? They look a bit painted on, but I'm sure they'll look fine. x3 23:41, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:19, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

The kit looks slightly more saturated. Do you think you can saturate this image a little? 00:23, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste close to the edges of the image and on this > side of her head. 01:15, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:34, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Graymist (Q) - Redone
I think my classic tabbies could use some work... Changes aren't showing  00:14, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and match the older pattern a little more? That was one of the reasons I voted yes...

Re-uploaded I modified the main stripes on the old queen a touch (reversed the swirl on the haunch, moved the patch a bit further up on the back, etc.) and added some more stripes to fill the space 00:56, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

This doesn't really look much like the old pattern at all... :/ Please fix it? 01:10, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:42, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Hm... can you blur the stripes so they fade into the pelt a little more like on the warrior? Right now they look very bold, and the colors don't match exactly. And blur the belly shading just a little? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:49, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:54, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add a few more stripes to her middle? Unless there's a pale underbelly. If that's the case, then define it. (oh, and after this is approved, care to email me the .xcf? because ilu c:) 03:03, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Graymist (W) ~ Redone
Redone for numerous issues. OA was muah. Several SW's told me to just redo the pattern...so here she is. :s 04:04, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, please. This be sexy.

Smexiness~ Blur the stripes a tad. 04:52, December 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Am I matching your pattern or are you matching mine? 00:10, December 4, 2012 (UTC)


 * Whomever put their image first shound be the image the other is based around  01:46, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

We agreed to redo the pattern entirely, Ivy. Scar, you should match Leggo's.

Well Leggo is the OA of the image and pattern, so.... 03:19, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Q 2) ~ Redone
OA was muah-ish. Redone for numerous issues, like pattern and shading and stuff. I like this 8D 05:10, December 4, 2012 (UTC)