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Grasspelt (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA is Specklestream, and it needed to be lighter. I also fixed up the shading.

24 hours.

Pinestar (Alt. L2) ~ Redone
OA was Ivyheart, and needed to be fox red. Plus, those stripes were triangles...yeah, the color isn't sitting right with me. Suggestions? o.o

It doesn't really look that fox red... Can you brighten the base color a bit? 23:21, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Kinda like this? o.o

Less red, more orange, and duller. Fox. 00:35, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

It still doesn't really seem like fox red. Make it more saturated and orange. Owo Unless changes aren't showing... 08:25, 19, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded. It is orange. o.o

Maybe lighten the stripes a little, and maybe shift them on the color wheel to a more reddish instead of orange-ish brown, so he appears brighter? I think the base coat looks just fine. Also, you might blur the shading a tad on his neck. Breeze whisker  17:53, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

24 hours.

Runningstorm (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to be defined. OA was Splook. Comments? 13:09, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the belly/back shading. Cute c: 13:00, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, actually.

Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Flufffff. 8D OA was Nightshine with a redo by Iceheart. 21:00, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Improvements made.