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=Tweaking=

Willowpelt (Q) - Tweaked
OA was Bramble. I re-did the shading, and the eye color didn't look like her warrior one, so I made them more alike. Comments? 23:43, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know you didn't tweak the earpink, but can you blur it please? Nice work on the shading. 23:49, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I forgot to thank/mention Atelda for teaching me how to redo the shading. :3 23:52, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 99.89.95.201 00:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - ^_^ 00:11, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me up there. xD 00:12, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the non-shaded part on the belly over the the left and brighten the earpink. 02:16 Sun Nov 27

Re-Uploaded 05:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

And make that highlight bigger - 02:22, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfur (W) - Tweaked
Watch out peeps, Im on a roll with solids right now BD

OA= Warrior&lt;3 05:04, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Er, what needed to be tweaked? The shading? Anyways, make the earpink a bit smaller and define the shading on the tail. Awesome, Bloo! xD 05:28, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Yep, same as all the other solids before. pssshh, finally a comment - 05:46, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the earpink a bit. This is so prettyyyy <3 08:03 Mon Nov 28

Re-uploaded - 00:08, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (E) ~ Redone
OA was Dawnfeather with tweaks by Night Shine and Oblivion. Needed to be brown, comments? 01:03, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. 01:20, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There is some gray lineart on the chest and the paws, can you fix that? 02:16, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the base fur colour just a tad. 01:21, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lilystar (L) - Tweaked
Ehm, hello? Its me agin, I tweaked Lilystar, blurred hightlinks and darkened shadings..hmm it looks a little like redoned shadings o_O Oh and Darkhallows is OA 18:40,November 28,2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and neck shading a lot, and possibly tone down the eyes. 20:41, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the end of the haunch and white pixels on the tail, paws, and on the left side of the cat. 00:23, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, reuploaded 10:11,November 29,2011 (UTC)

Erase the smudged lineart on the haunch. 02:04 Wed Nov 30

Susan (KP) ~ Redone
Pretty much did nothing but fix some miscolored lineart. I still have to put it up here, right? 22:28, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

And OA was *Ivypool* 22:42, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

No offence to Ivypool, but this really looks like it needs to be redone. The highlights are way too bright and needed to be blurred, it looks like the stripes are actually on top of the shading/highlights, and the base fur colour needs to be darkened or the stripes need to be lightened so she actually looks like a brown tabby and there isn't such a big difference between base colour and stripe colour. But it's your choice. 01:24, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Decided to go for it.. Fail on my part. xD 03:04, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Socks (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA was Nightfall101 and the shading was blotchy. 22:51, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. Nice job ^^ 23:43 Mon Nov 28

Re-uploaded 20:19, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Jumpfoot (W) - Redone
I got permission to re-do this, and I noticed whenever I make a charart I hate, then put it up, everyone LOVES it. Original artist was Hawkfire, with tweaks by Sandstar, Brambleclaw, and Bramble. Comments? 23:35, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lol <3 Lighten the base coat and darken the shading. Darken the earpink a tad and blur it. Pwetty. 23:41 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded I was right. 23:47, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste :3 I know, so well thought out, right. 23:50, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I thought I already erased it. 00:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Missed some between the legs :3 erase that. 00:10 Tue Nov 29

Reuploaded Oh. 00:18, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define/lighten the shading. It's a bit hard to see. 01:13, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Green eyes, Moonleaf :3 01:20, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The eyes were green, but oh well. 18:07, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (SC) - Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this, 'cause no matter what I did (colourizing, dodging, whatever) it just ended up turning bright yellow or neon orange -_- I preferred the old version. But it did need to be pale... so comments? Oh, and the OAs were me and Scarlet 00:56 Tue Nov 29

Lovely! <3 Define the light on the tail, and define the earpink. 01:03, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded mreh 01:32 Tue Nov 29

Darken the stripes i can barley see them. 03:45, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (DF) (W) - Tweaked
That shading has been bugging the living daylights out of me since the day it was approved, so I redid it. OA was myself. 01:45, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit. Well done. 05:05, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:38, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Dovestar (WC) (L) - Tweaked
As much as it may look it, I swear this isn't redone. I lightened the whole image, tweaked the shading, dulled the earpink, and lightened the eyes. OA was Brambleclaw14, Cloudskye and Icestorm? Not sure. XD Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:33, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Brambleclaw14, then I tweaked it and failed and Icestorm took over. =P 14:58, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Barkface (MC) - Tweaked
Just tweaked the shading, it was blotchy. OA was Icethroat21. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:36, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 01:06, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt. W)~ Redone
The only thing that was passable about this image was the shading, and i made it before i used layers, so it was too hard to tweak so i redid it. Comments? 00:16, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit redder and blue it a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 01:49, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit. You already know of my feelings for this image <3 <3 <3 02:02 Wed Nov 30

Reuploaded- Got the ear pink off the chart. 02:12, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the bottom of the haunch a bit. Beautiful. 03:49, November 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Speckletail (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine; redone to match her other images. 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the stripes a tad and blur them? 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 00:50, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and blur the shading on the belly. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh darn, I was kinda hoping to do this one. Oh well I've got plenty of images on my to-do list. XD Anyways, great job! Lighten and desaturate the whole image just a bit though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's this big patch of yellow waste near her tail, so erase that. xD 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and there's patches of yellow waste on her head, above our far front leg, and along her back. 02:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, they look brown like the pelt :3 02:58, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes lighter still. 03:31 Wed Nov 30

Whispering Breeze (Alt. SC) - Redone
Okay... I have been absolutely dying to redo this. The stripes looked all weird and the shading could've been defined, not to mention, I just hated it... OA was me. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:00, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

-squints- OA looks to be Nightshine to me. 02:54, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I remember when Scarletwind had this up for approval o.o Darken the shading a little. 02:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion, it's mine, I, being a total derp, had named it Whispering Breeze.alt.sharclaw.png or something like that. This is the renamed file made by Night Shine. ;P - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste on the back. Just a hint to help avoid waste - if you "lock" the alpha channel (the pixels without any colour on them) then you'll never have waste again 8D 03:43 Wed Nov 30

Leaftail (W) - Redone
Dunno why he wasn't on the list, he's a WindClan cat. Needed to be shorthaired. OA was Icethroat21. Comments? 02:44, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and define the ear-pink a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:53, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:59, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes - 03:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (E) - Redone
Had to be pale and match sharpclaw image. Comments? 03:28 Wed Nov 30

Define the ear-pink a bit more and I think I remember that she had a graying muzzle. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:43, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded derp how did I forget the graying muzzle. 03:50 Wed Nov 30