Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 16

Pine - Approved


OK my Fist try so tell me what is not right Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:32, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Hi Brambleclaw, that's really good for a first try! Lol, you just barely beat me to putting up the first rogue for approval ever, since the blanks are fairly new, but... XD I can only see a few things you need to change: First, you need shading. It looks like you might have a little, but you need much more. Just decide where your light source is and then figure out where the highlights and shadows would fall. Next, this isn't necessary, but you might want to make the fur slightly off white, because in reality cats aren't perfectly white. Then, the spots. I really like your arrangement, but make a few of them different sizes so it looks a bit more natural. Then, just take the Blue tool (almost every image program has one) and go over all of the color- but don't blur the lines! I know this can sound like a lot to take in, but trust me, that is really good for a first try. ♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 12:24, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the picture stretched? Also, it looks as if you put shading but in a cream color. You don't want that color for shading. What I recommend for shading is making the cat slightly less white and then taken the burn tool and going over it a lot of times until you can see and differentiate what is shading and what is pelt, but don't forget to blend.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 13:46, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

It does look stretched. I'm going with Swallowtip on this one. Try making the cat fur a little more grayer, and use the burn tool all over the belly and the chest. -- Rain whisker 09 15:13, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

OK I will do all of it soon :/ Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:31, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The whole thing is a little fuzzy.-- Darkhallows My den 04:43, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Well it's a try :/ sould the old file be got rid of? Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Didn't you upload the file with the same name? -- Rain whisker 09 12:30, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

nope :/ Brambleclaw14 Talk 14:36, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

You should always upload over the old file. The corrcet file name for this image would be something like: Pine.rogue.png Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:46, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

OK I will, if I upload it more Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:19, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

OK, this file is now called "File:Pine.rogue.png, per suggestion, if I upload any more they will be uploaded over the top of this file. As to what I've done: It shouldn't be streached, if it is then it's a problem with the blank template. Shouldn't be fuzzy (and if it is... well, cats are fuzzy :)). I've added some shading in. Redone the spots and ears. Thanks Brambleclaw14 Talk 11:29, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

He's nearly there you just need to add a touch of shading on the tail and blend the ear pink into the pelt a bit more. -- Dawnfeather talk! 12:17, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

OK will do so soon Brambleclaw14 Talk 13:05, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I've done it now. I also had to redo the spots, because I deleted them by accident Brambleclaw14 Talk 13:41, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Very nice! Just color in his eye and give him a pupil and a highlight. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:49, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Ahh yes I was going say I can't find what eye color he has, and what is the pupil? Brambleclaw14 Talk 07:14, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

oops I know what the pupil is :) I will do the highlight soon, Brambleclaw14 Talk 14:00, September 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * sorry this is being so long, but I will do it. Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:45, September 14, 2009 (UTC)


 * OK then I put in the pupil, for the eye color well you can see what color it is. Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:49, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The pupil looks strange; try looking at some of the approved rogue's eyes. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:30, September 15, 2009 (UTC)


 * OK then I will do it on thursday :/ (and what is the (m) for?) Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:35, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

I think (M) stands for Mosswhisker. -- Rain whisker  12:34, September 16, 2009 (UTC)


 * OK Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 12:40, September 16, 2009 (UTC)


 * OK is this one al right? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:51, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I think he's pretty good now. But what do I know? I'm a newbie.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:40, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothig wrong! Great work Shruggy. Comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:24, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:52, September 19, 2009 (UTC)