Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Thornclaw (A) ~ Redone
Redone because of shading and stripes and everything. Last OA was me. Comments? 04:56, 28, 08, 2013

He be a sexy apprentice too! Darken the shading a bit more and define it on the head 04:59, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Scarly. 8DD 05:11, 28, 08, 2013

Define the shading on the upper part of the tail, perhaps?

Still working, wifey? 04:16, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, Jenrock. ;_; I gotta decline this.

If no one else has already reserved this, may I take over? 01:13, September 9, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

You don't need to ask, just take it  19:17, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Changed the heading. I'll have it up in the next few days, hopefully. 00:47, September 11, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Millie (Lo) - Redone
Last OA was Scar, redone for not matching among other reasons. Comments? Changes might not be showing. 23:35 Fri Sep 6

Define the eye depth? It looks like there's no color at all. This is amazing! 00:17, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Define just the tail shading? I really do like this. .o.

Re-uploaded. 00:53 Sat Sep 7

The collar lineart looks kind of ragged. Try smoothing it out by adding a pixil or two along a few edges and it will help  20:35, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt Ki) - Redone
Redone for multiple reasons OA is me. 18:33, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes look a tad bit more like just pixels... maybe have the blur settings really low and try bluring them just a smidge?

Swoop (CG) ~ Redone
OAs include Iceheart and Scarly. Changes are not showing. Comments?

Wooo~ She's sexy. Define the mudstreaks 00:13, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Could you crop the image please? Also, the changes don't seem to be showing. 21:22, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Willowkit (CP) ~ Tweaked
this is actually tweaked rather than redone let's see how this goes changes are here 23:16, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe lighten/blur the shading on the leg on ---> this side? Lovely! 01:14, September 9, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

I don't have the file for this anymore from when I tweaked her to be darker, so I'd rather not screw it up but I can try if it's really needed 03:37, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading seems fine. 23:21, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Crowfeather (Lo) - Redone
Redone to be smoke. Comments? Changes are here 04:05 Sun Sep 8

Think you could blur the shading a bit? 16:17 Sun Sep 8 2013

Dovewing (W) ~ Redone
Needed to be a smoke; too lazy to name the OAs c: Lookey here for changes. 15:22, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Possibly define where you added the smoke to her fur, I cannot even see it right now. 17:04, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

How would I? I thought it was just gray with a tinge of brown. You mean define the brown? 19:59, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

No smoke is where the first part of the hair is light colored and the rest is he pelt color, it's mostly visible around the neck, chest, and tail. It'd be kinda like Darkstar (SC). Basically what Breezey said on the talk page. 20:13, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reups -prepares to get shot- look here for changes. Would someone mind making a smoky tutorial on the tut page? 20:53, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Define the smoke and enlarge it. 00:40, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Reups look here for changes 17:09, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reups changes may not be showing 19:53, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

It looks more like she has a pale chest and tail underside and not so much as a smoke. Maybe give some more variety? 21:03, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Variety? I'm not sure what you want me to do. 21:19, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

I think Scar means to make the smokecreep up the neck more and make it stray onto the thighs and face. 23:22, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Yep ^^ Maybe add separate smoke layers increasingly larger? I'm horrible at explaining things :/ 07:07 Wed Sep 11

Reups changes aren't showing yet 15:27, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (A) ~ For Approval
Redone to be smoky, most recent OA be me. Changes aren't shwoing yet. 17:03, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the smoke? 19:26 Sun Sep 8 2013

Meh, withdrawing this. 20:21, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

May I take over? 23:22, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried. Comments? Changes be here. 00:11, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Would you like the .xcf? 03:42, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Yes please, Leggy. Thank you very much. Would you like my e-mail? 21:02, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Blackclaw (E) ~ Redone
I still think he was Reedwhiker's father. o3o Anyways OA is me so yeah. Colors are the same as the warrior.

He looks a bit lighter than the warrior. Maybe darken him a bit? Wonderful job as always, Skye 21:07, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think he's lighter... all the colors are the same, but I'll fiddle around with the shading and see what I can do.

Not mandatory, or is the ear pink shading kinda blotchy? Or is that just a gradient end earpink? Gj omg I love the eye position! 05:08 Wed Sep 11

I'm already fixing the shading and that's part of it.

Re-uploaded. Changes be here.

Bramblestar (W) ~ Redone
OA be Ferk, redone for the same reasons as the other images. Comments? 19:06, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe expand pale belly? 07:03 Wed Sep 11

It's the same as the deputy's, so I think it's fine. 18:14, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Soot (Lo) ~ Redone
OA be Dazzle and Misty, redone for smoky. Comments? 22:44, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Define the leg shading.

'''Re-up. ''' 23:08, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

Millie (KP) ~ Redone
heeeeeeey 06:24, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) ~ Tweaked
Skt withdrew, so I thought I'd have him. Tweaked for ragged fur, changes aren't showing yet. 15:33, September 11, 2013 (UTC)