Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Snipe (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to have a shorter tail, ripped ears, and make the darker grey black. OA was Ivystripe with a tweak by SnowedLightning. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 02:33, April 20, 2018 (UTC)

Hmm...could you possibly define the shading, particularly on the legs? 02:01, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

the tail was meant to be longer, not shorter. it's not that short in the manga. the ears also aren't quite that shredded. 02:21, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

I know this is not what it was tweaked for, but there is leaking shading on the stomach that is quite noticeable.

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:03, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (warrior alt) ~ Tweaked
previous oa's are mintstarr, i hate this. also, guess what happened? i was a dumbass and forgot to save the .xcf so i have to redo this when i get an inevitable comment to smooth out the shading ayy lmao... --

While you said smooth out the shading, can you define the ear pink? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 04:06, April 23, 2018 (UTC)

While yes to defining ear pink, could you add back the ear pink that was on the original version of the image? It seems a different color/shape and it shouldn’t have been touched too much since this is just a tweak ~

Re-uploaded okay spooky? your critique was eight minutes before i uploaded this. i'll do it next re-up. also i'll try - i cant really have the files when the oa is inactive but if i try copying pixel by pixel or smth??? --

You needn’t copy pixel by pixel; just download the old version, remove the lineart, and erase most of the image, just leaving the earpink square^^ You can work with it the same from there and it won’t have been touched. Same could in theory be done with any aspect of a cat because if it’s a tweak it’s not supposed to be a redo.

Smooth out the shading and define it on the legs and the back end near the hind leg(booty?) Define the ear pink some, too? And define the Lightning on the tail. You're doing great man!!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 13:42, April 23, 2018 (UTC)

re-uploaded there's still something about this i can't put my finger on --

There's leaking shading on the back, haunch and closest front leg. 06:06, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth it out on the legs and define the shading depth and light source a weee bit? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 09:07, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded hi i redid the shading because the old shading layers just... didn't work? locked up and bullied me they're meanies --

Smooth out the shading a little bit more, and maybe especially on the haunch?

Define it on the front legs too. 22:20, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (alt warrior 2) ~ Tweaked
previous oa is mintstarr. this looks hella different from the other one, but it's because this is the clearest, lightest colourpick i can get from original. --

Can you smooth the shading and define it on haunch or near end? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 09:08, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

Smooth out the shading more?

Stempaw (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was me. Tweaked because I was dumb and made his ear white when it was supposed to be orange my bad 12:28, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Hawkwing (K) ~ Tweaked
tweaked for fixing my old tabby tweak; i'd made a mistake in the layer order which hid some shading, and also the white texture the other images have, but this one didn't

Can you define the shading a bit and define the ear pink in --> ear. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 22:11, April 25, 2018 (UTC)