Talk:Mistakes in the Warriors Series

Clean up
This page needs MAJOR cleanup before it can be an article. Do I have the go to start deleting signatures, cleaning up grammar, etc? Or should I clone this and move it to a project page first? Ajedi32 00:13, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm starting to work on it. Feel free to delete my edits, if I'm not doing the right thing! Willowheart May StarClan light your path! 00:18, August 27, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Np, great job so far! Ajedi32 21:43, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Format
Hey, one question about the cleanup here. Should the various mistakes be in point format or in paragraph format?

Point Format Example:


 * Rosetail is not listed in the allegiances.


 * At the beginning, when Firestar (then Rusty) is talking to Bluestar, Lionheart, and Graystripe (then Graypaw), at one point Bluestar says, "You are an unusual kittypet, Rusty." How would she know his name? In my copy, when Graypaw is hunting it says: GREWPAW stalked the mouse, followed by his APPRENTICE Lionheart. At one point, it called Bluestar Blusetar.

Paragraph Format Example:

One mistake is that Rosetail is not listed in the allegiances. Also, at the beginning, when Firestar (then Rusty) is talking to Bluestar, Lionheart, and Graystripe (then Graypaw), at one point Bluestar says, "You are an unusual kittypet, Rusty." How would she know his name? In my copy, when Graypaw is hunting it says: GREWPAW stalked the mouse, followed by his APPRENTICE Lionheart. At one point, it called Bluestar Blusetar.

Personally, I like the point format. How about you? Ajedi32 21:43, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

To Do
This list documents what still needs to be done before this can be a full article. Feel free to edit it whenever you want. --Ajedi32 21:58, September 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * Finish removing signatures
 * Remove Personal Comments
 * Add Formatting (Point or Paragraph?)
 * Remove Non-Mistakes (Things that people have said are mistakes, but really aren't.)
 * Add source citations, removing any entries that cannot be confirmed.

Funny
You have to admit some of the mistakes are funny! Quickheart 21:59, September 8, 2010 (UTC) Yeah, they are. XD --Ajedi32 22:01, September 8, 2010 (UTC)