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Into the Wild/Chapter 24 ~ Silver Nomination
Credit to the one/s who worked on it before me. Comments? 04:30, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

CBV? 23:44 Sat Dec 19

Yes, actually. Sorry to break the CBV, but I'm afraid that I have to nag about the character list again. There are several cats who seem to be minor characters from what the chapter summary says, but are listed as mentioned: Dawncloud, Blackfoot, the unnamed silver tabby and the unnamed ShadowClan apprentice(all seen fighting in 2nd paragraph); Runningnose (gives Yellowfang cobwebs in last paragraph) and the unnamed ThunderClan kits (seen in last paragraph).

In Chapter 22, the ThunderTlan kits are named: Frostfur's and Lionheart's kits. Perhaps name them this again, instead of 'the unnamed ThunderClan kits'? Also, one of the ShadowClan cats is 'unnamed silver tabby', the other is 'unnamed ShadowClan apprentice'. I think it would sound better if both had ShadowClan in it (so Unnamed ShadowClan silver tabby), but that's just my opinion. 16:16, December 20, 2015 (UTC)

Updated 21:45, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before vote? 04:04, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Vote's up. 03:01, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

The Rescue/Part 1 ~ Silver Nomination
Okay so it's hard to write the summary of a graphic novel chapter that is like 40 pages without making it too long (oops did it anyways) but trying to not make it confusing. Anyways, tell me if there is a part that is confusing as in the location, what the character is doing, etc. or if a part doesn't make sense. Or any other comments too, of course. 03:28, December 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBV? 04:31 Tue Dec 29

Vote's up. 23:49 Thu Dec 31

Dark River/Chapter 4 ~ Silver Nomination
The quote is really long, so if anyone wants me to I can shorten it down. Comments? 23:54, December 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you kind of shorten it down? I mean, it looks fine, but the quote's kind of like a paragraph... Just leave the important details in there, I guess? 01:51, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

Updated Like this? I'm a afraid that I might have cut out an important part, but does it sound ok? 02:11, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you cut out an important part. It sounds good to me. 02:15, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBV? 23:49 Thu Dec 31

The Rescue/Part 2 ~ Silver Nomination
Again, see comment on Part 1. Also, for some reason it says N/A for the preceeded chapter, so if anyone knows how to fix that, I would be very grateful ^.^ 17:48, December 27, 2015 (UTC)

For the kits in the characters section, could you just use, say, Firekit (Unnamed)? It seems a bit messy to have as it is now, and it causes problems with the mclist template. Otherwise, this is very well written. Nice job. 15:55 Thu Dec 31

Updated Thanks! :3 21:44, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

Join?
Hi, I love reading the warriors books and I see this project is about improving the books' articles! I would love to join. I know my edit count is very low but I still hope you consider my request! Thank you! Starlingfur (talk) 02:14, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

Of course, I'll add you in now. Please refer to the guidelines when contributing. If you have any questions, ask any lead :-) Welcome to the project! 04:24 Mon Dec 28

Thank you so much! Starlingfur (talk) 04:37, December 28, 2015 (UTC)

The Rescue/Part 3 ~ Silver Nomination
I don't know if I should put Beyond the Code/Part 1 for the next chapter, so if you think I should, tell me. Again, see comment for part 1. Comments? 16:44, December 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dark River/Chapter 21 ~ Silver Nomination
That was probably the easiest and shortest subpage I've ever written ^.^ Anyways, I made the main quote be the main quote for the book, although I think that what Tigerstar says (which is his main quote) would be more fitting for both, tell me if you agree. Comments? 21:33, December 30, 2015 (UTC)

Sunrise/Chapter 26 - Silver Nomination
Comments? 23:42, December 31, 2015 (UTC)