Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Pearnose (MC) ~ Tweaked
ready for round two? 01:08, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

should have said this before but the pale parts are far too blurred and dont blend in as well as they did in the original. 08:39, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sunnytail (D) - Redone
spitting in younger me's face w/this new and improved ray of sunshine (:  22:09, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Idk if it's just me or if her shoulder shading is a bit... off?? I mean that always happens to me so idk me no like this black lines

Smooth out the shading, i can see the smudge marks. 05:54, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Frost (Ro) ~ Tweaked
shadin 21:55, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Can you thin out the shading on the face a little if you get what I mean 21:58, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded shut the hell your mouth   15:24, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? 19:10, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Littlecloud (MCA) - Redone
I took all the colors from cloudy's version. He sent it to me, and don't comment on the shading b/c I will fix that. 00:21, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

He has a texture and the stripes are slightly smudged to give it a furry feel. I know the file I sent you has texture, and the stripes were tweaked after I sent you the file and I hadn't gotten the chance to tell you.

Also, the stripe layer that I used is actually on multiply, hence why the stripes look darker. I can tell by the color of these that something isn't set properly.

Alright. I'll get to that. (I didn't see the texture on your file though...) 12:53, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I...I hate texture. And smudging. This is literally the worst thing I've ever done. Bear with me. 13:40, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Please smudge the stripes a bit more. I actually think this looks pretty good. 19:09, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I messed it up even more. Oh god. I am sorry you guys have to look at this catastrophe. 19:57, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Lichenfur (E) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Ashshadow, Iceheart, and Mistypebble. Tweaked to remove the underbite. I just realized I could have just reverted it, but I already went through all the work to tweak it, so... 01:41, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) ~ Redone
Round 2 05:14, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. So brambleclaw's warrior doesn't really go down and rise again. It's basically straight. Can you fix that? 13:13, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Thin the stripes a little and define the pale bit on the tail? 19:08, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

@Appledash, could u clarify, please? 05:30, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Littlecloud (MC) - Redone
OA is... I'm not sure, actually. Sandy renamed the file, and then Nightshine cropped it. Flamingomom3 and Icy did shading tweaks on it and then I redid it, and it's been mine ever since. Icy's is supposed to match mine, before you comment, not the other way around.

define the tail shading? 04:01, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) - Redone
needed to be tabby. Las are Tiger, Rowanflight and Mounty. 00:14, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! Can you just give points on how you made it? It'll be make it a little easier for me making the kit and the other users working on the other images. 01:38, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Waaaa I thought we're using my pattern ;-;  Maybe define the light source on the shoulder and hind leg?

Re-uploaded matched Bramble's pattern and fixed stuff. And btw, the texture was a layer of medium-colored texture with a layer of white texture on 40 opacity and a layer of black texture on 70 opacity or smth like that but do you want the file, Stealth? 04:00, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

I you can give it to me. Talk to me on my talk page. 04:37, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

nose isnt filled in. 05:19, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:47, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Bouncefire (Alt.W) ~ Redone
OA is Iceheart and tweakers are Bbun, Ducksplash. Redone to make him a solid cat. 02:54, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the shading? (If you don't blur, smudge/smooth it out) 03:07, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:35, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (DF) ~ Redone
Wow I screwed it up. OA was Jayie, redone to be a tabby

Wow, I really need to keep a closer eye on the tweak nominations page. I'm sorry, I hate to ask this when I clearly already had a chance to take this, but is there any chance you'd be willing to let me do this? I only ask because I made the Dark Forest blanks, and this was the only Dark Forest image I ever managed to do before they all got snapped up. With almost any other image I'd understand, but I really don't want to lose the only image I got to do for the blank I created. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:37, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

But Jayie, this is the only dark forest image I did as well...

Considering jayie /is/ the original oa, she should have dibs over her image. Not too sure how it would be resolved in this situation however.. it could go either way. 06:14, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Well, Bramble reserved this first and Jayie wasn't there to claim it, so this image is Bramble's. Jayie /did/ have dibs over it when it was being nominated, but bramble claimed it. If Bramble decides to give it over then it would be Jayie's but it's Bramble's because Jayie wasn't there to claim it. 06:15, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry to beg, but I made the blanks, and I was only ever able to grab one image to do with them. I was okay with that, but I really, really don't want to lose the only image I was able to make with the blanks I created. Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:03, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Regardless of who has it reserved right now and who claimed it on the tweak page, it is Jayie's image and she should be allowed to redo it if it wants it. Especially since it was her only DF image. 07:12 Thu Oct 1

It's first come, first serve. Bramble has it reserved, so regardless of it being Jayie's image, it's bramble's. Something similar happened to Bramblestar's apprentice image, and the OA asked for it but the redone artist actually refused. This image is Bramble's unless she gives it to Jayie. 07:17, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

It passed so quicky that Jayie did not have a chance to claim her image. Let her have it- OAs always take priority. First come, first serve isn't fair when it wasn't on the tweak nominations page for even a day, honestly. That is nowhere near enough time for the OAs to notice. >.>

She had more than 11 hours- but that isn't the point, the point is she wasn't there to claim it. It is unfair to Bramblesnow to have to hand this over- she already has this done, and Jayie wasn't there to claim it. I believe that priority only holds when the nomination is ongoing, an OA cannot just automatically snatch an image from someone when it already has passed and was posted, that is unfair and something similar to this happened where the OA wasn't allowed to reclaim it. I understand that Jayie wants this- but the main point is, she wasn't there to claim it herself. 08:07, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

But also, Bramble, are you willing to let her take it, or are you willing to do this yourself? 08:10, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (L) ~ Tweaked
05:18, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

can you smudge the tail shading? 06:59, October 1, 2015 (UTC)