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Queen Blanks ~ For Approval
Righty-o. Here we go with the queen blanks. Comment away my friends. ^w^ 09:42 Tue May 28

I'm no expert on this but maybe square up the shape of this --> forepaw and define where the du-claw'd be. I can't really explain how, the but maybe slope the haunch a bit more, it looks kinda flat compared to the shoulders. Gorgeous work, Berry! 22:15, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps ---> this leg could be curved a tad? 22:50 Tue May 28

Maybe you could make both sides of the longhair's tail fluffy? The straight line looks a bit odd. 01:18, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could define the top of the nearest shoulder a bit? Also you might disconnect the line on the same shoulder from the head. As is it looks a bit awkward. You also might define the joints a bit more on the other leg and even out the sizes of the ears. Though I doubt you'd need it, if you need a redline feel free to ask. 2:06 Thu May 30 2013

Maybe the tail can be curved a tad more --- no cat's tail is that straight when they walk. 23:22, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, Breezy I wouldn't say no to a redline. xD 06:18 Fri May 31

Re-uploaded meh I did some stuff on the shorthair - decided I'll work on the longhairs later. 12:45 Fri May 31

Maybe slant the toe line on her left front paw the other way, or make it straight up and down? And maybe make a small line over the base of her tail where it joins with her haunch on our left; just to show a little more depth. These are really stunning... 00:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the hind paw a bit more and maybe define the "ankle" of the leg that's just behind the lifted forepaw 01:24, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

How about these? Ignore the face, though. Yours is fine. Except for maybe the sizes of your ears, which should be more even. 15:48 Mon Jun 3 2013

Re-uploaded officially naming these blanks Hannibal because they look like they want to eat you. 08:17 Fri Jun 7

Umm... what happened to these? They look odd. different. 10:26, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps thin and even out the tail lineart a little. 10:33 Sat Jun 8

Re-uploaded. Sorrrel, I was given a redline by Breezy to fix up some anatomy issues. .-. Please do not call my blanks odd, and don't comment unless you're offering critique. 10:45 Sat Jun 8

I'm sorry, Berry. I was just surprised by how different they looked. 12:02, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Don't know if this'll make any sense, but can you make the curve around our front right paw more noticeable? 13:20, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

The hind thigh looks lumpy. Maybe smooth it out a bit more? The tail seems bigger than the body. Also, define the front right paw (the one that is not on the ground). 15:03, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I'm very confused; when you go to the file for this is shows that it looks more like the original version; here it looks like the redline Breezey gave you. Is the wiki playing up? Just asking. 01:39, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe shorten the whiskers by a few pixels, make the tail a bit thinner and maybe shrink her front paws and her right (her right) back paw a just a little. 16:28, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

The bottom of the tail on <--- this side looks like it has an extra line on it, the front part of the belly (or chest?) doesn't look like it connects to the belly smoothly, and the shape of the paws look...off? to me. I don't really know how to explain it, but something about the digits on the paws seem to be throwing me off. 00:49, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Berry? 18:28, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes- sorry for the lack of re-uploads, I've not had access to a computer. The line on the tail, Ivy, is a bit of fur and I'll keep it unless someone else says otherwise. and the Hannibal eyes stay eheheheh 07:35 Fri Jun 14

Possibly smoothen the lineart on the back? (there's like a little place where it rises :P) 12:21, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:08 Sat Jun 15

Smooth out the hind food and make the actual part that touches the ground smaller and less bulbous. 4:14 Sat Jun 15 2013

Re-uploaded 04:17 Sat Jun 15

Thin the tail more. 10:22, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I'd like to keep the tail as it is unless someone else agrees. 14:33 Sat Jun 15

Can you make the legs and paws a bit thinner too? 15:40, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. 16:18, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Can you taper the end of the tail a bit more at the tip and the lifted paw looks a little too splayed 00:28, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel. If you think about a real cat, the tail gets thinner at the tip. It does not look that way now - and these are the short-hair blanks after all. I do not want to sound rude. Please don't shoot me! 02:26, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Shorten whiskers by a few pixels? 18:44, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the hind paw just a tad and thin out the tail like Hawk and Sorrel said? Other than that, these are honestly fine. Thistleflight (talk) 22:51, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

Could you please remove the dots above the head? It's a style thing and doesn't go with the style of any of the blanks we have. And yes, I agree the tail need to be thinned out a ton. It's almost thicker than the legs right now. Make the dew claw stick out less on the front paw, and make the back paw a more defined shape rather than a really smooth kinda soft line that makes it look too round and blobby. Shrink the paws quite a bit too, they're much too big for a cat in comparison to the leg size. Clean up the whisker lineart so it's a bit smoother, and maybe vary the lengths of the whiskers. Lastly, the chest is in front of the legs, so at this angle, the line for the chest should go over the far front leg, rather than the line that shows the leg connecting with the body being in front. Honestly, I thought it was mostly fine before and only needed a few minor tweaks, but... :/

Re-uploaded I tried a thing with the front paw but I can change it back if needed. I had issues with the hind paw...a lot of issues. e.e 10:39 Wed Jun 19

Her front paw that's on the ground is bigger then the others. 14:29, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Her back right paw looks as if it is pointing outward, could you possibly make it so it looks like we're looking at it straight on? Those paws look great already, but if you need a little reference, I found this. Also, on the base of her tail, there's just a little stray line there. And last, could you make that line on the back of her foreleg on her shoulder (one that is lifting up the paw off the ground) straight instead of curving in? <span style="">19:30 Thu Jun 20

The front left leg could be curved a tad more. Also, the lifted front paw should be curved more as well. Also, I find that the queen looks a little scrawny. I hate to sound rude, but honestly, I liked it better the way you had it before, but... x-x 00:35, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (W) (Alt) ~ For Approval


He was seen as gray in ''The Rescue. ''Comments? 20:39, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, back, ears, and forehead. 22:13, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded same issue with Brackenfur; I may not have gotten rid of all of it because it's very hard to see. 22:23, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink a bit, and the "highlight" on his paws and tail? Nice! <span style="">04:09 Thu Jun 20

Reuploaded wow, solids really are easy... 11:50, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, he looks fairly flat...

Reuploaded 16:24, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 3) ~ For Approval
Called pale ginger in Rising Storm. Changes not showing. I'll reupload soon with better shading. 21:19, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes look red/pink. Make them oranger, and add more stripes to the chest and legs. 21:21, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, and if he gets an alt for this, could you possibly cite this in his trivia? c: Bb  un   legs  21:23, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'll fix the stripes soon. I'm going to keep the color of the stripes the same unless others agree. 21:34, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

The shading looks... I don't know... greenish? 21:39, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I used black shading because the tinted shading was hard to see and hid the stripes. 21:46, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

If you'll be keeping the stripe colour, can you make it lighter then? 22:01, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the haunch and the neck a bit. Sha dew  ing!  22:05, June 20, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. 23:41, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes seem a little...
 * Hides* weird. Maybe make them a little more realistic?  00:25, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm inclined to agree with Hawk on this one...they do seem a little unrealistic....

The style of stripes is fine imo, but they should curve more with the body and there should be much more of them. Also, they shouldn't all be connected to the back, there should be breaks and such. Make the earpink less gray and possibly more visible, and add some depth to the shading on the front legs please.

Reuploaded. Did a new stripe style because I didn't know how to fix the original without starting over. Plus, I've always wanted to do a classic tabby. 16:46, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Waste and miscolored lineart. 16:49, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

Stripes are too orangey compared to the rest of his fur. Also, the flank stripe looks like a patch or spot; thin out? 17:58, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:08, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm, might be just me, but the pale underbelly looks a tad gray compared to the base coat. Maybe ginger it up a bit? Nice work overall - I love classic tabbies! Bb un   legs  18:10, June 21, 2013 (UTC)