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Unknown Residents Blanks ~ For Approval
These were fun! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:48, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

I'll fix the other image on my next upload and thicken the lineart. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:52, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

On the shorthaired blank, perhaps just round off the tail tip? or make the fur tips on the tailtip pointier, it doesn't look quite right the way it is.

Maybe make the -> front paw a little more pronounced? Not exactly sure on how it would look but I think it should be sticking out a little more at that angle. I'm assuming that it looks the same on the shorthaired blank so fix it on both blanks. 03:37, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Am I the only one who just sees a gray box when it comes to the short-furred blank? ​

You're not, but i commented saying I'll fix it on my next upload. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:45, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

For the head, can you lengthen the bottom a bit and make more of a mouth, and then the chin? 07:51, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

It's actually the muzzle itself. I just had the cat look down, so the chin, I don't think, is there. It's the top of the muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:55, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart

I think the right (our right) front leg is thinner than the left one. Even them out? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:48, January 11, 2018 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I'll fix the thickened lineart later and add fur to the elbow. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:51, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

is it possible to maybe make the longhair tails a bit fluffier since theyre supposed to be longhaired after all 07:31, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe lengthen the extended paw?

What do you mean lengthen? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 17:44, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Make the leg longer; right now it kind of looks disproportionate. (but that could be just me)

Is the front leg on our right suppose to be bent or straight? I'm thinking bent. If so cats tend to stick their elbows up almost into their ribcage like this. So a cat crouching like that would have the elbow inside the lines that make the body. This would also help with how the leg looks a little shorter than the rest. 16:35 Tue Jan 16 2018 16:35, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make the back on the long-haired blank more fluffy? 21:06, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Crop the shorthair blank to the lineart (I think the longhair already is) Also there's a line on <- front leg near the head that I don't think is supposed to be there

The right (our right) front leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

I haven't forgotten about this! I shall tweak them on my next upload later! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:14, January 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:32, January 22, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the -> back leg on the short-haired blank more bent than the long-haired blank's? If that's the case, could you make the long-haired blank's leg more like the short-haired blank? 20:43, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

They're the same thing, it's just fluffy on the long-haired blank. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:03, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the line I commented about earlier is still there, so I'll circle it, as well as a few other lines. I can see that the lines are all in the whisker area, but they don't seem to connect anywhere on the head, which is why I think they're out of place, and they aren't on the shorthair, but they don't look like fluff. And finally, the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

the front of the hind leg also looks a little thin around the lineart, as does the all paws. 05:03, January 27, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo had said they were out of town, and experiencing some family issues. I don't think they've returned yet, but even if the Still Working goes by 24 hours, it shouldn't be declined, because it wouldn't be fair to Cosmo if she's not here to work on it. <span style="">02:29, 2/03/2018

Blanks are exempt from the one week/one month ruling. These won't be delcined, and Cosmo came to me and let me know about her activity. These will stay up.

I am home from out of town, but still family issues are going on and now my computer in sai isn't letting me save any files for some reason, even though I shut it down and stuff. I'm still trying to get back on and tweak these blanks, but I'm sorry for the inactivity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

It's all good, Cosmo. Thanks for updating us!

Beetail (W) ~ For Approval
Bee boi. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:06, February 1, 2018 (UTC)

Cute! Do you need the file? Also could you smooth out the shading on the paws + legs?

The file would be good! Send it to cometandcosmo@yahoo.com. Thanks! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 17:12, February 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did not receive the file yet though. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:09, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry for the late response, the file has been sent!

Could you lighten the shading? --ErmineGlow (talk) 20:02, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's acceptable. I can still see the colors/patterns below. <span style="">11:27, 2/04/2018

I actually agree with Ermine. A little bit wouldn't hurt.

Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
Yes I know the shading is icky, and the color's probably off, but seeing as I don't have the manga. . . ?

You never uploaded the image ?

uploaded derp star is derpy this brings my derp count up to 5,825,757

I can't tell which direction the light source is coming from, as the flank shading is really contradictory in my opinion. As a side note, it also needs to be smoothed out; and it appears to be leaking on the --> arm. <span style="">02:23, 2/03/2018

re-up like this so much better

Expand shading on the back paw, lighten shading a tad, define shading depth, smooth the shading around -> front leg, and I think the shading is leaking from the belly a little

Smooth out all the shading just a bit, actually.

Perhaps connect the small gap of shading between => foreleg and chest/side shading on top?

re-up just redid the shading

Spiderstar (W) ~ For Approval
<span style="">09:53, 2/03/2018

Okay, I reviewed the cite, and I'm sorry, but I honestly don't think that counts. He was leader at the time, and the next page reveals that. A leader and a warrior are two totally separate things, and in this case, his rank isn't warrior, nor was it said to have been in the past, and that's what this image would represent.

Would he at least be given an image for the mistake, and have it mentioned in his trivia? <span style="">12:33, 2/03/2018

Hm, I think that would suffice, since he is very clearly not ranked as a warrior as indicated by the next page. I do believe that in some cases, they use "warriors" to refer to all fighting cats, whether they be leader, deputy, or just a normal warrior. Context is everything, but I'm more than willing to delegate the mention to the trivia, if only because the rank was technically used.

Fyi for everyone confused: Visual editor is bugged, it is a Wikia error that has been reported to the technical team. There is really nothing that can be done right now other than switching to Monobook / editing in source mode and removing everything. Also, I have to agree with Jayce, I believe that this image is not necessary. 22:33, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

And why would it not suffice? It was a mistake, and the trivia is there. It seems perfectly valid to me, and I even-doubled checked with Snowed if this was okay. <span style="">01:19, 2/04/2018

You're all good, Broken. Rank mistakes do get images, and we've done that for countless characters. Could you possibly define the light on the tail?

Re-uploaded. Thanks Snowed. :) <span style="">11:31, 2/04/2018

can you define the texture and soften the stripes just a tiny bit 17:17, February 4, 2018 (UTC)