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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. -- 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

These are lovely and I can't see anything to comment on, so CBA? 23:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but i feel like the blank looks slightly too crowded in general. notably the face (might help if you remove some of the lines on the ears ig?), and how does the blank look with those three lines removed on the cat's back leg? also, i feel like the tail still looks too straight–feel like a cats tail would naturally be more bent in such a position. 04:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

also, i feel like the linearart thickness is pretty uneven on the shorthaired blank– it's extremely thick on the cat's back and on the leg in which the paw pads are exposed but thin in other places. 04:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded The tail is based of something like this https://www.omlet.co.uk/images/cache/1024/604/Cat-Chartreux-a_plush_coated_chartreux_cat_lying_down.jpg]] with the tail being straight and just the tip being curled. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:39, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

That, to me, still shows it curving a bit more than what you've currently got here. I'd also maybe suggest shortening the leg with the visible toe beans? Not sure if you'd see that much leg from this angle, especially when you look at the blank without a tail.

I honestly think the tail looks fine. A cats tail is always flat to the ground 23:44, 8/05/2019

CBA? 04:48, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry but my comment about the leg showing the beans being too long, still stands as a part of my comment above.

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:18, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

One last thing, I promise, but the fur on our left backleg looks very clumpy, and I think it could be smoothed out more to match the other blanks style for that area (if that makes sense?) and with that, the same would be applied to the other leg too

Reuploaded Wasn't quite sure of what was being asked, and I didn't know which blank was being referred to either, but if I'm not mistaken it is the left blank. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:55, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

I meant the longhair one sorry!

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:46, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

Pebble Heart (Alt K) - CBA
16:53, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the stripes a bit? 18:55, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

They're the exact same as the that was approved a few days ago  20:02, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

This should match File:Pebbleheart.kit.alt.png.

The colors are picked from it, I was aware it existed. But I guess I'll have to match it a little better 04:16, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 02:51, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reup 16:23, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:33, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (TC) (W) - For Approval
— Imp uri ti  e s   ★  19:41, August 26, 2019 (UTC) There is some waster at the bottom of the tail where it twists --Moo (talk) 19:53, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

oops re-uploaded  — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  19:54, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture. The og warrior does not have any. The ear pink also looks brighter too on the other image. The shading on the haunch can also be smoothed and curved more (see something like this or this for examples on that curve). 20:01, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  20:33, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! Could you define the shading depth a bit? That's just adding a thinner, darker layer of shading. Also, add some shading to the back paw (it would be entirely in shadow with this source). -- 22:38, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  23:37, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

The back paw farthest from us should have shading. Shading is also leaking away from the lineart on the legs. -- 23:42, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  23:46, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

What happened to the back paw? It doesn't appear to be filled in anymore. -- 01:01, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

can you send me a screenshot of which you're referring to ? to me it looks like the shading completely covers it. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  02:19, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded, fixed some of the shading again. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  02:58, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

I gotcha. Here's a redline for a bunch of stuff. Potato's referring to the back leg furthest from us (see in red). Green is leaking shading (so fill that in); pink is where I would add shading; blue is where the shading is too overblurred/flat so erase the shading there. 03:00, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

aa thank you-- hadn't realized that was a back leg oop- anyway, re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  03:09, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Change "For Evaluation" to "For Approval.  05:15, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Only leads are allowed to change the heading, and only they are allowed to determine if an image/skill of the artist can be bumped up to an apprentice. Regardless, I will bump you up to an apprentice since you seem to have the basics down ^^ 14:24, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Snow had already promoted her to an apprentice. 17:01, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on both ears, there is also leaking shading between the haunch and back leg. -- 22:43, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  00:43, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

At the bottom back foot on the far side its light where I'm pretty sure there should be sharing. This might be a shading leak Moo (talk) 05:53, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a bit on the haunch? 19:10, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light to the front paw closest to us - with this source, it should be in the light like the other one

Still working? 23:34, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) - For Approval
this honestly looks horrid and im half asleep but i tried — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  04:02, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Change the "For Approval" to "For Evaluation". 04:46, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

It can stay at “For Approval”, I’ll go promote them. this is more than enough to be promoted. ​​

The patches on the queen are larger and more smudged, I can provide a redline later tonight. 14:31, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

ahh it seems i didn't save the layers so i'll have to redo the whole thing anyway. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  16:35, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  16:57, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be more black on the chest? You're doing a great job so far! -- 22:42, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

'''re-uploaded.  — Imp uri ti  e s'''   ★  23:09, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading leaking at the <--- curve of the tail, along the <-- front leg and within the ---> ear. Could you also expand the shading on the shoulder and neck (specifically the black part of the neck), and the bottom of the haunch. I also think the shading depth could also be defined overall. ^^ 00:20, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.  — Imp uri ti  e s'''   ★  00:29, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

My comments about the leaking shading on the <-- foreleg and adding shading to the top of the shoulder (the black part) still stands. 14:54, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere - I can barely see it. -- I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 06:14, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

There's a little waste in between the paws (the place where all the paws meet) and the tail bend, near where the tail touches the ground. -- 16:21, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 23:34, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. -- 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad? ​​

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry 01:34, 8/30/2019

Reed Tail (W) ~ For Approval
i'll fix the stripes later, just realized they don't look the same as the other images

I see some waste along the tail, near the bend and where it touches the ground. -- 16:28, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

Also smooth out the shading on the face --Moo (talk) 21:03, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up Can the both of you point out where you're talking about? im a bit confused

There's also a thin line of waste underneath the tail. 23:35, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Stonewing (W) ~ CBA


00:52, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste in between the four paws, and some under the tail. I also think the shading should be defined on >>> this side of the tail just a tad more. -- 00:55, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

01:22, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink some more? 02:46, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

his earpink on the right ear is not low enough and there is a slanting line where it should be past the whisker Moo (talk) 03:13, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

12:55, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a little bit of ear pink leaking out of ---> ear from where you smudged it. 03:44, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

03:51, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:57, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Splashheart (W) - For Approval
01:29, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Dull down the shading tint slightly, and also even out the shading a bit as well (which means to make the darkness more consistent with the overall shading). -- 01:30, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:34, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define and just slightly expand the shading on the front legs. I feel as if the eyeshine in < this eye should also be receded a bit so more of the general pupil shows. -- 01:36, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:44, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add more shading depth to the front legs and tail. sorry I comment way too much on shading -- 01:45, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps remove the shading from the eyes? 02:45, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. it's fine, i appreciate it because it helps a lot. :) 01:52, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

'''reuploaded. eye shading, gone. 05:12, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Sparrow Fur (ki) - For Approval
shading is bad, i'm going to redo it. 02:21, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:21, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (K) - For Approval
Let's give a tabby a shot rip Moo (talk) 02:32, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define/expand the shading and smudge the stripes more. -- 02:33, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:43, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

the shading on her face seems a lil flat. 05:09, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I have no idea how to fix flat shading but I tried and also fixed some leaking Moo (talk) 08:44, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

A kinda easy way is to add another layer of shading that covers only a small area of the first layer of shading to create a sense of depth (kinda like on Doestar's kit)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 07:13, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W) ~ CBA
*take me now* also i tried to make her tail match her app and og warrior 02:44, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

just a suggestion but maybe bend the tip of the tail downwards? That's how it looks on all of her other images.

brighten the white on the paw a smidge?? 15:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Reups The leader has the tail curled upward and the pose is generally the same, so I'm gonna keep it as is. ^^ 16:55, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Scorchwind (W) ~ CBA
02:44, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sasha (W) - For Approval
i hate this. it's horrible as heck. 05:42, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you remove the shading over the eyes, Smudge the tail a bit more smoothly, and lighten the shading? Thanks! Moo (talk) 08:35, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it, too. -- 15:08, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:40, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the shading depth on the front legs, and smooth the shading more. -- 17:46, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:57, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading, and erase it on the eye. -- 18:59, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

And can you smudge the earpink and brown a bit more? Moo (talk) 21:20, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. gimme a sec, and the eye shading will be gone. 06:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

'''look at them eyes. reuploaded. 06:27, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading more --Moo (talk) 04:23, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:31, September 3, 2019 (UTC)'''

The base colour looks too "cool" compared to her other images; maybe try #C59A70 for the base? Or even giving the shading a red tint, though that is completely artist's choice

Stonefur (W) - CBA
one of my fave boys

CBA? 16:56, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Stonefur (K) - CBA


CBA? 16:56, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Slatefur (Ki) ~ CBA
All colors from apprentice. Comments? 20:27, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:26, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Sootfur (W) ~ CBA
Comments? 20:27, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:26, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (TPB) (K) - For Approval
04:29, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. -- 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^

Tempest (Q) - For Approval
hi ​​

Briarlight (Star) - For Approval
First ever StarClan cat. And I'm glad she can run free like she always dreamed of. -- 00:28, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading on the forelegs would be switched if the light source is going ---> 01:40, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:04, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sunrise (Ro) ~ For Approval
All colors except the eyes and the pale belly came directly from Tree's images. Comments? 00:29, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

She needs to be long-furred, new cite for that was found.

02:08, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:30, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Flurry (Ro) ~ For Approval
FLURRY

Flickerkit (Kit) ~ For Approval
he was super cute in the book

01:08, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Moonlight (Q) - For Approval
my first time being an OA....i imagine her as some kind of blue himalayan due to kittypet ancestry 01:13, September 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Flickerkit (Star) ~ For Approval
i know nothing about him but no one hurt me or my son he's too precious 02:12, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) ~ For Approval


There's a line of waste underneath the tail. -- 03:08, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Swankit (K) - For Approval
another baeby

Snailpaw (K) ~ For Approval
I love my child​ 09:14, September 3 2019 (UTC)

Larksong (SS) (Star) ~ For Approval
RIP I love my child​ 10:26, September 3 2019 (UTC)

Sasha (K) - For Approval
My favorite part about this one: Making the collar. -- 23:16, September 3, 2019 (UTC)