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Thrushtalon (W) - CBA
I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-; 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me. 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups The shading looks wwwwaaaaayyyyyyyy better, /not  19:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the shading some 20:46, 03/25/2015

re-up 21:10, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the stripes on the haunch on under his neck/chest; he's starting to toe the line of triangle tabby. Also, blur and lighten the shading on the back 21:11, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could lower the shading's opacity as well, because I can't see the stripes at all through it. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up re-did him and made him a mackerel tabby. Dont know if it was the right choice... 02:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and blur it more. You can try secondary shading as well but it's just a suggestion. 02:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I should darken the shading more '-' 02:41, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit? I <3 his stripes. 02:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also, can you smudge/blur the stripes a bit, too? 03:03, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the legs a tad 20:38 Sun Mar 29

re-up Did I answer everyone's questions? 01:53, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit more, it's still kind of hard edged. 13:27, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, honestly. Could you smudge the stripes a bit more? This is looking very nice!! 17:17, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna have to agree with Tiger, just blur/smudge the shading a bit more. 00:15, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on the legs. 04:39, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

still needs blurring, and the stripe by his ear is really hard edged. 11:46, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I think he looks a little better. Changed the eyes to green because I think he looks sexier that way. 21:17, April 3, 2015 (UTC) x2 I dont know why the stripes look so hard edge on the wiki '-' My GIMP Says it's perfectly stripe like.. 21:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading and the eye depth, please. 23:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Merp? 13:15, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yo the shading looks really nice! Now define the shading on his back right paw, and add a few more stripes to the head. 14:34, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

You could smudge the thicker darker stripes on the tail. Spottehwobble!

I think the stripes are fine. And Spotted, if you are doing big text, end it with please. 23:54, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

So do I have to do what Foxy suggests on the stripes or... Leave it how it is? Im a little confused 3x 15:39, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-up on the shading, dont know 'bout the stripes... 15:44, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light in the front paw farthest from us and smudge some of the stripes a tad more on the tail. Lovely. :) 00:01, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Is there a way you could make the base a bit more of a warmer brown? He kinda looks just the slightest bit green- nothing too much. Just the tiniest bit more towards orange I think would do the trick. Perhaps around the shade of #9E7D5E?

Add more stripes to the head. 12:59, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I add about the same amount of stripes to my warrior images, and countless others have no more than an M or W stripe- tbh, I think the amount of stripes on the head is perfectly fine.

re-up looks iccky. ): 14:39, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, it doesn't. I think it looks phenomenal, hence why I'm going to CBA it.

hate to interrupt but could you smooth out the shading near the shoulder andon the tail? then back to CBA 20:29, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up -flips table- 20:58, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA ? 00:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Ambermoon (W) ~ For Approval
I'll redo the shading if it's really as crappy as I think it is. I'll probably also smudge the stripes a bit more if needed. 14:27, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sweet! Smooth out the shading a bit. Oh and maybe blur the stripes? 17:06, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'll smude the stripes instead, and I'll redo the painful shading. 01:38, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks fine, but you should smudge it in the direction of the fur. 11:37 Thu Apr 2

I agree with Sunstream, please smooth out the shading. 12:01, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle hole :3 20:06, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Ouch! Painful mistake now that I've been doing chararts so often and I still forget to remove the triangle XP I do have a problem though, I'm in Zhuhai so my computer doesn't have gimp. I'll download it and redo the entire thing. 03:18, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 05:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more 06:19, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Still working, Bramble? 08:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-upsYep... sorry for the delay just got back from my vacation trip, and don't even talk about my computer's crappiness. 09:45, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and define the light on the paws- I'm having a rough time telling the pale parts from the main pelt.

this? 10:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why are there two of them? >.> 10:23, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

All you really have to do is edit the section and say reuploaded, tbh. You don't have to add another image in or anything of the sort- the section automatically updates with the new version once you upload it to the file... idk why it aligns it or adds a second one.

I think it looks lovely :) StormSongz (talk) 15:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you so much:))) but tbh if anyone mentions for the shading to be lightened, I'll totally agree with that 16:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Alderpaw (App) -CBA
I am incredibly proud of this. =3 01:27, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the light on the back leg. 09:18, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

the stripes seem to get lost in the shading, define them or something? 11:41, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:48, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on his right back paw and the shading depth 09:09, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading? lookin nice 20:50 Fri Apr 3

Thanks 23:04, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on our right back leg? So cute. 15:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad, his stripes are still getting lost in it. 00:01, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

^-^ I can't lighten it any more or it'll look a bit odd 21:58, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 09:34, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gonna be real picky here and I'm so sorry, but it's something that I know I've been told about countless times. Could you make the ear pink less neon red? Other than that, I quite like this image. *.*

Re-upped :) 23:29, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you. CBA?

Lilyheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Not happy with these stripes :/ 03:06, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading. 03:14, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know but she seems a little lighter than her other images? It could be the use of highlights though. Also, I think the stripes are thicker and less dense on her other images. 03:45, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

If you can see here- http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Lilyheart.warrior.png - she has some gold highlights on her face and sides. Can you add those in? 13:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups They were already in, under the darker stripes, so I can't add them. I used the warrior image for reference, sooo... sorry :/ And my images always seem to look lighter, it's just the highlights. 16:50, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

the belly looks pretty grey, lighten the shading up a tad? she's pretty 20:51 Fri Apr 3

reuploaded 23:13, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 05:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading that is between the back and the belly gives the stomach a lumpy look. Could you remove it please? I'm so sorry you can totally ignore me if you want 23:21 Sun Apr 5

Still working, Shinx? Four days is good enough of a time to ask and I know you appreciate reminders.

yeeeep, I was sick for a couple days and didn't really get on the computer, sorry. 08:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think all her apprentice and her warrior need to be tweaked, as she has white patches, it's shown on her kit but not on the others. Having a white underbelly + chest doesn't really indicate patches. Could you add them, please? 09:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Nominate it first, please. Then you can ask Shinx to add the patches.

Nomination is up 10:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Larkkit (K) ~ For Approval
Decided to do it. How do you? c: If something is wrong - write. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

P.s – Somehow, all the time want to call Larkwing.

Ok, a few things. First, please sign your posts with ~ so we know who you are. Also, don't align your images. I fixed the alignment for you, but for future reference, don't add the |left after the image. Also, the file should be named Larkkit.kit.png, so can someone fix that? As for the image, it's pretty good but define the shading and dull down the earpink. Also, I'm pretty sure he should have a black nose, as he's a black cat. 16:17, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Sorry, but I didn't understand (translator) about the signature and the left side. May you explain slightly in a different way? But I nevertheless understood some and corrected. So?

I'm really bad at explaining but I'll try. For the signature: add ~ after what you write to sign. For the image: your code should read instead of. And on the image, please dull the earpink a bit more. 17:23, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Next day I will make more dark earpink. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink after you dull it please? 17:39, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I updated. It is already possible to lay out? Сияние Кометы 12:46, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading just a little? I like this. 13:37, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – What does "Define the shading just a little" mean? Sorry, but I didn't understand. ShineStar 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's making the shading more visible, which I think you could still do 14:18, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – And how so to make? ShineStar 15:12, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Shading black cats is hard. What art program do you use? 16:17, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I use the GIMP program. ShineStar 16:22, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, tail, and the right side og the body. 11:39 Mon Apr 6

Re-uploaded – It has to be so shaded? ShineStar 15:32, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blue/smudge the shading and blur the ear pink on -> this side just a tttiinyy bit. 13:01, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded –  What, Brambleshade? ShineStar 16:17, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

In my opinion, though I am not in PCA, I think you should brighten the earpink as little is possible. Spott ehw ob bl e ''' It's   Lemon    scented!

I think the earpink is alright. 23:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose coloring? Black cats should have a really dark gray (like almost black) or black nose... I think. I remember asking about the nose thing once and got told it didn't need to be pure black.

Unless they forgot to say "re-upload" here, the nose is already black. That could be my screen though. 00:06, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

It looks red to me, not black. I zoomed in on my phone and laptop.

Re-uploaded – What you on me pulled hard? :D And now normal nose? ShineStar 07:44, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yarrowpaw (A) ~ For Approval
beep boop 17:07, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He looks brown, not ginger, so can you adjust the base color? Nice image, though! =) 17:14, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! I think the stripes are still good but I can change them if need be  17:21, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He honestly still looks really brown, could you make him more ginger? 17:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Imo he looks ginger, it's just the shading. Can you lighten up the shading a bit? 17:36, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If I adjust the base more, he'll look too yellow-greenish, so I played around with the shading color a little + lightened it. 17:36, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks pretty yellow. Make the base more orange, and then use a warm color for shading to keep it looking rad. 18:00, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face? I think this is very nice, Well done. 06:24, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

He looks golden not ginger... Russettail13 (talk) 13:33, April 5, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Bring it more towards an orange-red, like a sunset. You could probably color pick from Firestar or something to get an idea. 17:11, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

You could blur/smudge the stripes a little. They look a bit solid. Spott ehw ob bl e  It's   Lemon    scented!

Re-uploaded. Alright, much better. The stripes are fine, I'm not blurring them. 00:24, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Didn't look orange enough. 00:45, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks really golden. Russettail13 (talk) 17:24, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Are you colouring your base ginger or playing around with shading just to get to the ginger shade? 17:27, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Evaluation
Here's Dewy! All colorpicked from Dewpaw Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 23:16, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. 23:47, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

There are a lot of uncolored spots; fill them in, please. Also, define the shading and earpink. 00:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

In addition, there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. 00:03, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you're using the right sized blank. Did you grab it from the PCA main page? 04:36, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

If you need the right blank size, you could find it :)

There is a greenish spot on his haunch or something, you're going to have to do something about it. 13:32, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

@Scarletwind I used the male long-furred warrior blank. @Icebreeze and Foxy I'll fix it. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 13:43, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

What Scar means is that you've used the wrong sized blank. Go to the link Skid posted, right click on that image, save it, and use that to redo the image. 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

There's also waste in the part between the third and fourth chest tufts. 14:53, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fix the lighting on him. What program do you use? Also, isint he suppost to have a white belly/chest? 15:19, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I use PAINT.NET for all my images. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 17:31, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using layers? Everything seems to be blurred together. 08:18, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Well, in the new image I am creating (because of the wrong-sized blank), my layers in order from bottom to top are: Background Color, White-Gray Patches, Lineart + Eyes, Shading, and Earpink.

Ah, I think you should put the shading and earpink before the lineart. :) 21:50, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you fill in the un-colored parts around the outer edge? And there is some waste at the upper and outer edge of the tail, from what I see. Spott ehw ob bl e  It's   Lemon    scented

BTW I'm working on the new Dewnose, don't worry about any waste or etc. from this previous image. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups - *sighs heavily* :3 Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:23, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the white on the belly more visible? I can't see it.

You forgot to delete the part in between the belly and paws. It's not part of his belly! StormSongz (talk) 22:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)StormSongz

Define the light on the legs, please. 23:50, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest putting the white on another layer instead, that might the be the reason why it's turning out to look grey. 00:13, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Stonetooth (TAQ) (W) ~ For Approval
My first white cat.

Define the shading on the tail a tad 07:21, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~

Define the head shading a bit? Lovely job! 17:09, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

blur the tail shading a little? mostly where it meets the base of the tail 21:04, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Milkweed (Q) - CBA
Gah, I cannot get that shading to work. Any suggestions? The tabby bits are find, it's the black splotches that I can't seem to shade properly. Also, she was described as a splotched black-and-ginger tabby from what I heard, so I decided to make her a ginger tabby with black splotches, because that's what some tortoiseshell cats look like. It seemed to fit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we find the cite first? Anyways, try to smudge the patches more. 02:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

page is up, she needs a torn eartip, black muzzle, and a scar on her muzzle. 08:42, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged patches more, tweaked shading (still not happy with it), and added what Skt said. Any more suggestions on fixing the shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:38, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

THat is amazing! I couldn't do that, but can you smudge the shading on the tail and define the shading a tad on her face? Spott ehw ob bl e  It's   Lemon    scented!

Also maybe blend the scar into her fur more? It looks too sharp. 21:40, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Are the black lines texture or something if so they can be smudged 00:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

What black lines? She has black markings overtop of her ginger fur, and tabby stripes. There's no texture anywhere on her. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:30, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Gosh sorry, I should have explained. It looks a little like texture, (doing my best to explain) and they are dark lines running over the direction of fur. If you think its fine ignore me. Sorry Jayie. 00:33, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The dark lines are actual markings of the fur, not texture. I tweaked the scar, tweaked the shading, and gave her the amber eyes she's supposed to have. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:26, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm having a really hard time seeing the shading, could you define it for me? I actually didn't notice there was shading at first oops

Reuploaded. Oh god, that belly shading looks awful, but I tried. D: Jayie  Unwritten words~ 17:37, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Tone down on the highlights a bit, perhaps? Especially on the belly, it looks like metal-shine, for lack of a better phrase. 17:53, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:24, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Patchkit (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
Poor kit ;___; 02:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the white up a bit. Pretty cute for being...deceased. ;_; Nice job! 17:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

You can clearly tell its white tbh. It doesn't need to be pure white 00:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

There is little I can do, honestly. It's one tick off of pure white, and if I lighten up the shading, it won't show up on the ginger too well, and I like how the shading darkness it now, so I'd rather not touch it. 00:09, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Make it pure white. I don't know what people have against using it, but it's more than acceptable and lessens the chance of it being gray. Or perhaps add some faint highlights on the white.

Re-upped Oh no, it's not that I'm against using it. It's just that I color picked off his kit image, that's why it's off. I actually always use pure white unless there is a image to match- Now it's pure white, so it shouldn't look too dark. 07:50, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

that's bcause he has very slight texture, I used pure white for the base. I always do. 07:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I added texture 08:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think the ginger patch along his back/shoulder would extend a bit further down and go closer to his neck and the lineart where the leg starts. I also think the ginger on --> paw should be extended a fair bit- it looks like there's only a small part of the foot and barely anything else on that part that's got white on it. I think it could possibly be extended to the elbow-area... I'm looking at the kit image, and it appears to do that on David's image. Unless my eyes are tired? idk

Re-upped Did I get it? 02:57, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Juniperpaw (A) - CBA
shading black cats is a pain 21:20, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading just a tad Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:35, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:39, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

I like this- CBA?

Blossom (ro) ~ for approval
i have returned 22:03, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tortie parts. 22:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

She has tortoiseshell splotches, which I believe is something like this? 00:02, April 8, 2015 (UTC) Maybe a bit more patchy? User: Dewdrops25:45, April, 7, 2015

I think the splotches on the tortoiseshell were meant to be on the tortie part? I'd like a second opinion on that ;;; 01:19, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

splotchy could just mean messy looking, it doesn't have to be tortoisehsll patches. 03:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, the quote was "her tortoiseshell splotches...." 03:13, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think if that's what the quote says, you should probably match that. I changed Alder when she was called splotchy, so it's only fair to change this to match what the quote says. Judging by the quote, it sounds like a white base with tortie patches and stuff... kinda like Sweetpaw.

re-up i guess so 20:24, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading just a little bit. This is lovely. 21:43, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Pink Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ohlook. 22:32 Tue Apr 7

I think the white needs to be brightened quite a bit. He looks too...yellow? StormSongz (talk) 22:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

the white is fine, actually. nice job, hawky 23:16, 04/7/2015 Looks great. If you need to, define shading. User talk: Dewdrops66/talk > 25:23, 04/7/2015

Hawky, Perchpaw isn't archived. I'll archive it this time, but if you post something without waiting again, it will be declined on the spot. 00:05, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

can you maybe layer some blue over his eyes? from what I know albinistic cats have blue eyes that look red, not just red. 03:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah see I was going to make the eyes blue but I wasn't sure if you'd be able to see the red in the pupils. 22:13 Wed Apr 8

...Can you guys tell the shading is defined? I feel like I don't see it so I might define it some more... but idk. 22:14 Wed Apr 8

Define the light on then back legs, please. 00:09, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

His eyes are too, blue. We have no cite for it, anyways. User talk: Dewdropps56/talk > 6:42, April, 9, 2015( UTC)

and no cite for red eyes either, and albinistic cat eyes arent pure pink theyre blue with a pink tint, like humans I believe. ._. maybe tint it a little bit pink if it doesn't look purple, though. 13:45, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
hello. 01:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smothen the shading on the tail maybe? Lovely Breezy 01:52, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to be honest. I think if she smoothed it out she would be told to define it 04:00, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Bramble. It could be smoothed out. while you're at it, smudge the earpink a bit more 09:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 04:35, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Fern (Ro) ~ For Approval
03:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Waste right next to the chest. Lovely job David^^ 03:34, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded huh thought I got all of it but apparently not, thanks though 04:59, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Minnow (R) ~ For Approval
I'm trying something new for me so paws crossed it works. 03:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur or smudge the gray 03:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I also defined the texture, cause you couldn't really see it. 06:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot, please.

Blur the gray more and define the shading more 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can't see it. misread fox's comment at first, didn't notice the last bit 10:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload The white is pure white, it's the shading. For that reason, I won't darken the shading anymore. 22:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define doesnt automatically mean darken. I'd suggest you try to unblur/unsmudge the shading some, because i still can't see it. Also, to brighten up the white, perhaps try using pure white highlights? Its not mandatory, so that part is up to you. 05:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Not exactly sure how to do that, but I've just redone the shading altogether so that it's covering more of the gray fur. Look much better. 05:39, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Much better. :) Define the shading on the tail? 07:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (Alt. W2) - For Approval
04:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:06, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front paw farthest from us? 05:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:37, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Slash (Alt Ro) - For Approval
I took the gray as a partial of gray tabby (and gave him everything else he was cited for since it is part of his description) since I think we operate like that with normal descriptions...idk about you, but writing tabby all the time would get tedious and redundant.

Re-uploaded. David suggesting erasing the whiskers since he's clearly mentioned with only half of them and I would think that's kinda important to his description.

Does he have white stripes on his front legs? Otherwise, could you define the shading on the front leg farthest from us? This is beautiful.. I swear how the hell do you always make them look so perfect. o3o 09:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. They should be slashes, not stripes. I made them wrap around, kinda like how a ribbon would work, since there's not much to work with in terms of leg space. My OC is a silver tabby, so I have a lot of time to make gray/silver tabbies and it's some of my favorite things to make, besides black-and-white cats

define the shading a bit? this is gorgeous 11:37 Wed Apr 8

Re-uploaded. Thank youuu.

Star Flower (L) ~ For Approval
Why the hell did she hang out with Clear Pain in the first place 08:37, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes just a tiny bit by a pixel or two where they're thicker. There are a couple that look to be maybe six or so pixels long, when they look slightly shorter in width on the rogue. Also, unsmudge the tail stripes a bit as well- they're not as smudged on her rogue image. That's what I'm basing all my comments off of since it's a clear side-view. And she hung out because they're both trash imho.

Re-uploaded *prays to Erins that her kits won't be trash too* 08:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why do people hate them so much? >.> I love them both ;_; especially Clear Sky. Anyways, beautiful^^ I think her rogue image's stripes are less broken, and are less smudged/lighter texture. 09:42, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine, I have the rogue file that Beebs sent to me and I matched it 09:44, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

What's the point of asking for comments if users are going to reject them as often as they do? Yes, I'm going there, because this is totally unnecessary. Bramblesnow is correct, honestly. I'm looking right at her rogue image and they are smudged slightly less than this.

Re-uploaded Sorry about that ;.; is this better? 10:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I have a slight concern. If it's a side view, and Star Flower has a stripe along her back, wouldn't it show less than that big stripe you have? Maybe thin it out a little bit, as well as the base of the tail towards her back leg. StormSongz (talk) 15:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Am I the only that's happy for Clear Sky, that he has a new mate? Looks great. See if you Should consider blurring it....?User:Dewdrops56/Dewdrops56 8:21, April, 8, 2015

The stripes are smudged, not blurred. I'll try to smudge them more when I've got the computer, but not much, otherwise it would be just contradicting to what Cloudy said, and someone will tell me to unsmudge it again. Also, as for the stripe, the loner is facing a different side. But actually, I might redo these stripes since I seem to have trouble tweaking them right. 23:22, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I am not smudging them more now. That will contradict to what Skye said, someone will tell me to unsmudge it again because that's how it looks on the rogue 02:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks good now :3 13:54, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Cricket (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ew ._. But hey I got my uploader working again. K so I would rather not darken the shading too much more as it starts to looks really yucky with the base colors. Comment away~ 13:04, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. It shouldn't look too bad, imho. Is it tinted, or did you use black? Either choice is good, and I know black on ginger or orange cats looks pretty wicked.

Should he be short furred? Slate said that they are completely different. Just a suggestion!User:Dewdrops56/talk, 8:25, April, 8, 2015

Re-uploaded. Lol I actually used black, even though I had serious thoughts about tinting it, but I decided to give it a chance. And Dewdrops, I think Slate was talking about their personalities rather than their fur length, kind of like Squirrelflight and Leafpool. 19:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenwing (MCA) ~ For Approval
Changes Yeah... I can't shade on black cats or apprentice/mca blanks. I will probably redo this painfully bad shading on my next upload. 16:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reed (Ro) - For Approval
20:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? Looking nice :) 05:01, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the overall shading- It may just be my monitor, but i can barely see any. 05:14, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

He looks so fluffy! O-O 13:55, April 9, 2015 (UTC)