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Thornclaw (Alt. A) - For Approval
He has one for the kit, and the cite is real this time. I double-checked with some people in chat. Described as ginger. Comments? 19:04, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. 19:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color more ginger-y. He looks brown, and define the shading and highlights. 19:09, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And fix the earpink on both ears. The pink is covering little bits of lineart. 19:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink's match and redder 21:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I should know it's real, I added it. XD anyway, there's lighter ginger on his face, so maybe make the body that colour? Skt Spoilers... 22:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. You have barely any shading, there's no light source, there's miscoloured lineart, and I can hardly see the stripes. You have one week. 02:35, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

And just a warning, it's currently being discusses whether Brackenfur and Thornclaw's main description should be ginger, so this may end up being declined.... we'll have to wait and see for other's opinions on the discussion, but technically since they were first mentioned as ginger, it's quite likely they'll be changed. 05:56, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, why would it be declined? If it was changed, couldn't this just become the normal apprentice? Skt Spoilers... 06:02, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Not for sure. More likely that the normal apprentice would be tweaked, as it's an extremely simple tweak. Eh, I don't know, we'll decide when and if it happens. 11:12, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Euploadedray(Re-uploaded) Good? 12:06, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the fur more orange to match the kit better? 19:59, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and make the stripes match the kit. ^^ Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 22:42, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear, and then smudge it and make the color match the kit. Also define the shading. 05:14, 29, 06, 2012

Define the ear-pink  16:02, June 29,2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the ear. 16:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add eye depth. 16:46, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the kit? 14:32, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, Sky already said that. 14:44, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I thought Boss said Re-Uploaded after it. e.e 14:46, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Yes, I was caught in the east coast storm so I was left without cable for the past two days. And Re-uploaded.-- 18:01, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think that this about 80% done. Does anyone else agree? 18:31, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't count but, yes. Fill the earpink in more. 17:00, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

This looks pretty 80% to me; heading changed. Blur the shading tons, and make the colour and stripes match the kit. 17:03, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes match the other apprentice image? 00:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? ☯ ~ S t o n e c l a <font color="#6E6E6E" face="Comic Sans MS">w <font color="#523014" face="Comic Sans MS">~ <font color="#000000" face="Comic Sans MS">☯ 06:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but my dad put stupid restraints on the computer so I can only access it between 8 A.M.-8 P.M. for 1 hour. x.x-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:58, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on his ear. 13:02, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink more pink like the kit, and fill the earpink in the whole ear and then smudge/blur it. 15:01, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:33, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- 17:34, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes so it matches the kit? 17:36, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up into the ear. 21:14, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more and smoothen out the highlight on the haunch. 23:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I just realized I forgot to define the shading, so I'll do that now. x.x-- 13:34, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and thicken the stripes a tad. 20:15, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:48 Mon Jul 9

Mousefur (W Alt2) ~ CBA
Thank you for reserving this for me, Cloudy :) Durn dentist's appointments and drama... Anywho, I tried something a little more subtle for the fur effect, whacha guys think? 23:46, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. 23:48, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you shrink the earpink a bit and define it? 01:03, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and make the earpink less hot pink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 01:22, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Before you define the shading, blur it a little. Breeze whisker  17:45, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink? 17:47, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? 02:47, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Guys, I am so sorry about this. We lost cable after the storms and I have had no Internet access for several days. I promise to fix this tonight and work on my tweaks. 20:50, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Also reuploaded  20:59, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Ivy. <3 I feel that there's nothing to change on this image, so, CBA? 21:16, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but can you make the earpink a bit more smaller? 02:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Also lighten it up. It´s redder than all of the other chararts. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  19:48, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink color doesn't have to match exactly. Her normal color is dusky brown. This is light brown; of course they're going to be different.

Make the earpink more triangular 00:38, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink anymore? 22:27, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Once again, earpink is proving to be the bane of my existance XD 04:43, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit paler 03:57, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does this work? 14:55, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 16:54, July 7, 2012 (UTC

Also the ear-pink seems to fade into a paler color as it gets into the tip of the ear. Try to make it more consistant, please. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  21:46, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine.

Reuploaded defined tail shading. Anything else? 22:29, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Let's try this again. CBA?

I hate to interrupt a CBA, but the earpink is bothering me. It needs to be more triangular, it's coming out of the ear, and it needs to smudged into the pelt more. 22:36, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. Continuing CBA.

Sandstorm (Alt. Q) - For Approval
Shown as solid in the manga. Yes the shading's tinted, no I don't intend to change is. Comments? 10:57, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the tail shading a little bit? Loverlyy<33 14:37, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define her face markings? 16:07, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading/highlight. 01:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Ro) ~ For Approval
There's a cite for this, okay? x3 Anyways, Rainfur's rogue owo. Comments? 07:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

If there's a "cite for it", why is it not on his page? Didn't you think that before putting an image up, you should maybe confirm it should've been made in the first place? Just what I think. 07:43, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I did cite it. It's in his charcat box. 07:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I checked the cite. Rainfur was called a rogue. ^^;; Thicken and darken the stripes more to match the other images.

Wow. Ignore that. This is why Loonie shouldn't edit at 4 in the morning x.x Oh, and by the way: you can't just "re-sign" a post. Because now the time has changed so, apparently, I posted that comment before the image was even put up. 07:53, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I might need to blur them a tad more. 08:02, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes a bit more hard edge (I think that is the word xD) to match his other images? 15:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)T

he base pelt is too dark. Lighten up the pale markings so that we can actually see them. Smudge the markings a tad. I also don't believe I had a stripe going to the back of his head like that (goes to check to validate that) 16:15, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? I can barely see it. 20:50, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Still, make the stripes sharper, perhaps add more dapples to the back and lihgten the shading. 15:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is fine, but I think you lightened the base pelt too much. Also, lighten the stripes just a tad. 22:49, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:51, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and maybe tint it blue so it doesn't look like markings. 19:45, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

River (Ro) ~ For Approval
It's been a long time since I posted an image for approval. River<3 RiverClan's founder. 83 Anyways, it was decided that the founders of the Clans get rogue images. And here's River. See the PC talk page for more info. Also, I tinted the image's shading blue, because the leader seems to be tinted too, and I'd rather not change that. Comments? 19:42, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in his nose xD 22:05 Sun Jul 8

Bluuuuuuuue. Anyway, blur the shading on the middle area/belly/whatever and tail. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wind (Ro) ~ For Approval
I got the colors straight from Leggy, who made the leader image, so please don't ask me to change them. ^^;; Comments?

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit and blur the earpink. 22:38, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudging the ear pink is optional, and I'd rather not do it. It's fine.

When I did images in the past, I was told I had to do it. 23:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it's artist's choice. I don't know who told you that you have to do it, but you don't.

There's some waste by her head. (from highlights, it looks^) 00:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur where the shading meets the back/haunch highlights/lighter areas. And maybe expand the back highlight towards the neck a little. 01:34, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Darken the back highlight. 01:41, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Shadow (Ro) - For Approval
Blech. -not too confident it matches- Comments? 20:05, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can blur her shading/highlights and maybe darken her? I luff this 8D 20:08 Sun Jul 8

Re-uploaded. That stomach highlight... -twitches- 20:12, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darkern her a leedle bit more. 21:48, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the eye values a tad more? 00:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thunder (Ro) - For Approval
Bleh. e.e I'm going away for practically 2 weeks after Tuesday, so if this isn't approved before then (which it won't) I'm giving it to Icy. Second image that I had to copy stripes from Roo xD Comments? 21:50, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and darken the shading. Define the earpink as well. 22:02, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

I really wanted this, so I'll become a warrior. Anyways, define the earpink a bit, it's kinda hard to see. 23:09, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink matches the other images, so it's fine.

Y u steal my reservation D:< Anyways, make the paws whiter and define the shading. Good job <3 01:16, July 9, 2012 (UTC)