Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Rosetail (E) ~ Redone
Redone for multiple reasons, OA be either Scar or Mounty. Comments? Bbun (talk) 23:51, February 22, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

She's looking more golden brown than light ginger - fix that? Also define the shading some. 11:56 Sat Feb 23

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 15:44, February 23, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

She looks very flat, shading-wise. Add some more depth to it. 16:04, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 16:19, February 23, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

I would suggest making the stripes more ginger-y, they look a bit funny coloured. 22:29, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 22:58, February 23, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading on the chest.

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 19:16, February 25, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

The ear-pink looks kinda bubblegum-ish 02:29, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Shoulder shading needs to be blurred, stripes saturated more, and stripes seem a bit rectangle-ish, try pointing the tips more. 11:46, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the stripes. Bbun (talk) 22:09, February 26, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

ginger's looking odd cause of the shading color, tinting it would help, and it needs to be blurred.

Rosetail (W) ~ Withdrawn
same as elder 01:09, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Make it match the elder more. Bbun (talk) 15:46, February 23, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading some? 20:00, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

meh, withdrawing 00:07, February 27, 2013 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (W) - Redone
I liked the reddish color of the old one so I decided to go off of that. If it's too red I'll tweak it. Redone for realism. Yay braided tabbies. 05:31, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Uhh, a bit too ginger here. Really pretty, but brown it up a bit. 21:22, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:27, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Still looks... well, it looks like a torbie. She's just cited as brown tabby, nothing else. And the only brown is in the stripes. Now she's blue-grey and orange. 05:05, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

She's not? All of her colors are browns and she looks plenty brown on both of my computers. Her shading is a very dark blue, but that's no different than, say, Heavystep. 05:10, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

I call it as I see it. She still looks ginger and blue-grey and very, very pale to me. She just needs to be brown. I applaud your creativity, I really do, but this strays way too far from her cited description. 00:21, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

I don't see anything close to a torbie, however I do agree that the tinting could be tweaked a bit. It's just a tad much and it's throwing off the color to much. Tinting's good, but too much causes issues. Maybe desaturate it a bit more, or move it closer to purple rather than blue. 01:23, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hmm. I messed with it a bit. The shading is still blue, but it's a touch darker. 00:55, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Shading seems just a tad thick on the shoulder and the brown seems just a biiiiit creamy. Try moving it closer to the red instead of the yellow. 11:47, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Scourge (R) - Tweaked
Tweaked to make black darker. OA was Oblivion. And my gimp is being stupid with this image, and the changes are only showing in the thumbnail image. Since I have no clue what it's doing I'm just going to give it a bit to see if it fixes itself. 02:44, 02/24/2013

...He's not darker at all - he's a hell of a lot light o.o 02:45 Sun Feb 24

He looks darker in the file history...o.o Re-upload again, Shimmer.

Both the wiki and gimp is spazzing.... I have /no/ clue what's up, I've never seen that happen. o.o Er... give it a little while I guess? I thought you said it was just gimp, didn't realize it was the wiki too. We'll see what happens... 02:48, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yey~ Paleh figured out what was wrong with it. 03:47, 02/24/2013

Whee~ That was the strangest thing I'd seen in a while. 0_o While this is up for tweak anyways, can you lighten the white paw and add a bit of shading on it? Also, could you change the nose color to match the kit? 04:04, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:27, 02/24/2013

White paw still looks gray. Lighten it or add a highlight perhaps?

Re-uploaded Went ahead and added a highlight. 03:40, 02/27/2013

Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
Eh, not so happy with this. Might scrap him and redo him again, or at least the shading. 04:44, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

I know it's just cause of the shading, but since the shading covers almost every bit of white, it looks quite gray. Any chance of you changing the light source so the white doesn't look so gray? 05:06, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'd really like to keep this light source. I lightened the shading and added some bounce lighting, so I think think that helped. 01:28, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Ahh white's much better, but due to the fact most of the shading is on the white with only a tiny bit going on the gray, it makes it seem a tad flat. Try thickening the shading a bit so it goes a bit farther on the gray? 11:45, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

To me, the gray looks a little too brownish. The shading on the paws doesn't make sense, either. Not sure what it's called, but add some shading between the front and hind leg (near the belly area). 23:30, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading makes perfect sense, and the gray is fine as well...or at least that's what I think. It's up to Breezey what to change, in the end.

Cloudstar (W) - Tweaked
Most recent OA is me, and he needed to match the leader better. I tweaked the patches a little but I think it was the shading giving it the illusion that it didn't match, because I looked at the leader when making this. 18:32, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

No it's the patches that didn't match for sure, it wasn't the shading causing it. It basically looks like it was matched to the leader's front view patches, whereas this is side view. The shoulder patch needs to move over a lot more and the chest patch should be gotten rid of, and the belly patch made bigger and the haunch patch rounded. Also try and match the leg patches better. 03:26, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Rainfur (R) - Tweaked
OA was Berry and it needed to be lighter and have a pale underbelly. On closer inspection, I think I may have made the lineart thinner in my attempt to lighten the base coat, so let me go fix that really quick. 18:58, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeh the lineart got lightened in the process, and there was also waste. Now fire away with critiques! 19:01, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading some. And while I'm here, do you want the xcf file cause I have it? o3o 00:22 Tue Feb 26

You know, since you have the file, it would be easier to use it, but actually if you want this you can have it, I was just doing it since it's been sitting around is all  03:57, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Pouncetail (A) - Redone
OA be moi. Redid the stripe pattern, redid the shading and tweaked the white a bit. 00:20, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

The shading on the white is extremely flat and makes it look gray.

You forgot to reserve this scar. The earpink, nosepink, and eyes are really bright, and the eyes need depth. 00:25, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Trying a new method of shading, not sure how much I like it... :/ 02:27, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Ginger's color looks off now, white still looks gray, and ear/nosepink and eyes still look neon. 03:24, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:54, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Eyes are still too bright and ginger miscolored. 11:44, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

The ginger looks fine to me? 17:39, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I designed him so that the ginger is kinda pale 23:59, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

White's still looking gray and flat. ouo

Re-uploaded 03:53, February 27, 2013 (UTC)

Speckletail (W) - Redone
OA was me, needed to be redone for lotsa reasons including color and stripe issues. Reffed from the cutest little lilac kitten I've ever seen. Comments? 00:27, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Pixie (KP) ~ TWeaked
OA was me and I tweaked the shading 03:08 Tue Feb 26

Darken, thicken, and blur the shading a bit. Iloveher 11:43, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blackstar (L) ~ Tweaked
needed patches 05:52, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Try adding some lineart around some of them so they seem more patchy instead of like big scars? 11:43, February 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. meow 00:08, February 27, 2013 (UTC)

Breezepelt (K) - Tweaked
Needed to be darker. OA was Stoner. Changes may not be showing. 00:21, February 27, 2013 (UTC)

Redclaw (W) ~ Redone
Eww. I don't like the color. x.x

So change it? You don't have to match Squirrelflight's coloration, there are many ways dark ginger can be interpreted. Like so. 21:05, February 27, 2013 (UTC)