Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 84

Beetlenose (A) ~ Approved
Here he is. Comments? 16:52, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him up, then add shading. The lineart is very hard to see. 17:28, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is my computer or does he look like a really dark brown but not black. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your computer and '''re-uploaded. ''' 20:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC) I can barely see the shading. Darken or define it. 00:31, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Re-Uplaoded. 22:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour a lot and add some depth to the eyes. 22:54 Sun Jan 1

Blur the earpink a lot. 03:18, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour more and blur the shading. Smudge the earpink into the ear with a smaller brush so it looks like fur. 02:23 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. 21:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 02:15 Wed Jan 4

Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot. 23:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and shoulder 05:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. 16:38, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe lighten the shading on the face...? It looks a little dark on my screen... 17:54, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this. My time on Wikia "has been limited", says Mom and Dad. 01:18, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. I withdrew Firestar  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  04:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay it doesn't look like it, but it's different. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:35, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Remember to change the heading. Nice work, but define and blur the shading/highlights and blur the earpink. 00:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I forgot to change the heading. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:33, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink and redden it, and either brighten the highlights, or lighten the base coat. It's too dark to see the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:51, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did it using the colors from the warrior. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  16:30, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Nice. 01:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else says so. I took all of the colors from the warrior. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:19, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:35 Mon Jan 16

Blur the earpink. 00:04, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the light parts lighter, I can hardly see him. o3o Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  01:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm working on two solids? Oh, joy! :\ Sandlegs  What's up with  Leggy? 01:13, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Everything's up with Leggy. xD Anyway, can you smudge the earpink into the ear a little more? 01:24, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Umm if I do, whitch I tryed, it looks really horrible and bad. And I cant blur it easily... oh yeah I know why, because your awesome. End of the world xD Sandlegs  What's up with  Leggy? 01:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

It's spelt 'tried'. ^^ Try smudging into the ear using the sides of the earpink, it just seems to go up from the middle. ^^ Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  10:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded well you know I cant spell! Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 01:00, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make the smudges look natural by making it a bit smaller. 02:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

No offence, but the earpink smudge looks like a blob. Smudge the pelt into the corner of the ears please. 22:14 Thu Jan 19

Reuploaded Okay now does it look better? Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 22:32, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink some more. 03:59, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt a little so that the shading is more noticeable. 03:49, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the corners of the earpink. 20:56 Sat Jan 21

Make the "highlights" a bit more noticeable. It almost looks like you just filled him in with black. 21:43, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry but the base color is taken exactly from the warrior. The shading is also taken from his...sorry. Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 03:05, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think this looks fine, CBA? 04:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but smudge the (<---)corner of the (--->) ear more, oter wise this is perfect. 02:56, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the earpink. 09:56, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the back leg shading. 19:15 Sat Jan 28

Lighten the earpink so that it matches the warrior. 20:10, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I think this'll be my last reupload because...well look at my user page. Anyway all of the colors are from the warrior. I hope nobody kills me >_>;;;  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave! 17:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is ready Sand, CBA? 17:49, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. 21:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchfur (A) ~ Approved
I think this is the last spot! This is my first as an apprentice, from 02:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! There's some waste by the ear on ---> that side and on that side of the tail. This is great Mooneh! Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:47, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks! 02:56, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's specks of waste around the charart, and part of the earpink closest to us leaked onto the back of the ear, could you erase that? 03:07, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Just tell me if you see any more waste, I tried to get it all. 03:23, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 03:24, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Smudged, got rid of the waste. 03:43, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the... I don't know if that's a highlight or part of the normal fur, "spot" on the haunch a tad. 14:34, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's a chunk of waste below the hind paw closest to us, and flecks of waste around his paws. 17:13, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''So much waste! XD 19:03, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the hindleg. 19:54 Sat Dec 31

Re-uploaded. I blurred. =3 22:15, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Is the haunch highlighted? If so lighten it. 16:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Light enough? 20:27, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the face a bit. Looks nice :3. I dont know if its my computer, but there is a little waste on the sides of the tail.--User: Fallenstars 23:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The highlight on the haunch seems to be too big. Make it kind of rounder and smaller. 03:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I really made it worse, but see to it. =3 21:42, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

There is still some waste around the tail. 21:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If there's any more waste, I'm a mouse. =3 22:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a mouse ;) there's some above his tail. Smudge the earpink into the ear some more. 02:33 Tue Jan 3

There is also some more waste near the base of his tail. 21:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *squeaks like a mouse* I know there's more waste...go ahead, point it out. XD 22:04, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on both of his hind paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  01:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

And around his head. 04:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy =3 21:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The part at the base of the tail looks kind of like a highlight, darken that part. 01:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is that better, or too dark? I smudged and blurred it a lot to blend it in but still be darker. 03:46, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the earpink is smudged into the cheek. Erase that and make it black. 02:54 Wed Jan 11

Re-uploaded. There you are. Enjoy. =3 23:52, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste around the head. 02:07, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, that was when I fixed his ear from Sweetflower's advice. 16:07, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink does not look defined enough, but it is fine if it matches his other images. Just Call Me Crazy! ~Chez 22:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. Otherwise it looks great, Mooneh! 22:29, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 18:16, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Better. Darken the shading a bit more and blur it, and it should be ready. 23:34, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy =3 21:22, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

He looks too dark to me. Make the light parts lighter? Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  23:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope it looks better! 11:28, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Give him a torn ear since he was described with it as an apprentice I believe. And either brighten the highlights, or lighten the whole image if you don't use them. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:28, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

There is some waste/miscolored lineart on his back foot closest to us. 15:45, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gah, forgot the waste. -.- Do that later. Paleh, I don't want to give him a torn ear unless you know for sure he got it as an apprentice. 01:20, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. 01:41, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Lovely~ 01:44, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Twi! 15:14, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, also, I looked at Scorchfur's other apprentice image, and it didn't have a torn ear...So unless it was approved wrong, I'm not tearing his ear. =) 00:31, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waster beside his chin. 09:28, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 09:43, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the haunch "highlight" (if it is one)? :3  21:23, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but okay...=) 22:43, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten and redden the ear-pink a bit more. 04:06, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Reddening it made it brighter, so enjoy. (Yes, I see the waste by his ears). 09:41, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill his whole ears, it looks like it doesn't quite right now. And lighten the base coat a bit to match the warrior. 22:36, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Could you darken the nose a tad? Not too much, though... <span style="">00:32, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

How would I lighten the base coat? Because I think using the dodge tool would make it too light, but when I colorpick from the warrior, if I just slab a color on there, I might blur it into the shading/highlights...Gosh. I need to tear his ear. I Found where he got it, and he was an apprentice. -.- 10:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is taking too long. Withdrawing. Anyone who wants to work on it can go right ahead. 11:34, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I will take this over, if that's okay, however, I can't reupload until Monday or Tuesday because I have to go to a hockey game and I'm busy on sunday, I might be able to upload today, not sure...&#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 15:22, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:52, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the earpink? 20:06, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be "Under Evaluation" because Oakbreeze is a kit? 09:58, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Purty! Blur the earpink a bit! <span style="">23:58 Sat Jan 28

I hate to do this but I'm declining it because I'd like to reserve Shadow's loner. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 19:50, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure you change the heading when you do withdraw your image, Oakbreeze :) Did it for you this time. Anyone with a free project may take over  22:28, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 04:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- 00:19, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I can't see anything to fix, so CBA? 02:29, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear. 8D 11:33, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added the torn ear, so CBA? 01:44, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it's not acceptable to CBA your own image like that. It's unfair and a bit cruel to the other users that do not have the privilege to CBA their own image. I'm not going to interrupt CBA but this is a reminder. 02:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oops! I'm sorry about that, but I was thinking that since Paleclaw CBA'ed it, and I just added a torn ear that it would be alright. I'll keep that in mind. I knew I was gonna mess up a lot as SM. Dx But others do it...? ;.; 02:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine ^^ Approved. 21:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (A) - Approved


Never thumb an image. Also, you have to re-upload this over Cedarheart's apprentice image. Also, make the ear-pink fill the ear completely. Add depth to the eyes, blur teh shading and highlights a lot. 21:30, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is it? This might be a stupid question, cause I'm not a computer wizard, but what does "thumb" mean? *dies of embarassment*

It means it has the frame around it, or something and says who it was added by. Blur highlights (if there are any) and blur ear-pink, a lot, and define shading. Also, don't forget to sign with ~ 22:49, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, but can someone help me delete the thumbed one? I can't seem to find a way to do it..... sorry. 23:04, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, blur it plenty more, the ear-pink still needs to fill the ear completely, define the shading. 23:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should Add depth to the eyes... 02:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink, its too hot pinkish. Rainface, Leafy already said to define the shading. :P 21:13, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I just need I reminder on define-ing shading on gimp 2.6, and then I'm covered. Also, I don't want to be rude, but Rainface on your second comment what do you want me to blur? the shading or the earpink? help? 21:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste where haunches are and it seems flat. Plus it seems like you smudged where you need to blur. Shading could be gaussian blurred. 08:05, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you added shading so you need to add some. Darken the nosepink. Blur the highlights a ton, though that was already mentioned, I think. And Twi, adding depth to the eyes is the artist's choice. 12:10, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

She knows Ferret, It's just a suggestion. The earpink needs to fill the whole ear, than the pelt smudged into it. <span style="">20:01 Thu Jan 5

In my opinion, I think the nose color is find. I think you should lighten it just a tad instead. 20:59, January 5, 2012 (U

Reuploaded I did everything except gaussin blur. I'll be on vacation for couple days as well 15:20, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more reddish-gray, like his warrior & elder images, and blur the highlights (If someone's already said this, just disregard it). 04:36, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and darken the shading. 16:33, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a whole bunch. It looks too blotchy.

Are you working on this? It's been 7 days ._. 16:11, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. If any user wishes to take over, they may. 21:37, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I will, please. 21:43, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, didn't Mossnose say she wasn't going to be back to the 13th? So shouldn't she get to post it again when she comes back? Just wondering... <span style="">22:17 Sat Jan 14

Maybe so, but more than a week without work slows the process of the project and the project's goal. 06:26, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If she's not working on it, I could take over. I just noticed the heading change. If she's going to continue, that's fine, just an offer. 01:53, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Go for it. 15:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Alright then. I'll get working. 15:26, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Changed heading. 20:20, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Smudge th epelt into the earpink and define the depth in the eyes if there is any. <span style="">20:25 Mon Jan 16

Re-Uploaded - Man I am bad at those eyes. 21:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Smudge the earpink more? 02:08, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, and darken the shading at the base of the tail, on the neck, and between the back and front legs (where would that be, the flank?) <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

(Yes, I think that's the flank :P) <span style="">21:05 Sat Jan 21

Hey guys. I am so sorry I wasn't able to come on, my computer crashed, and I can't access anything. I'll try to get on when I can on my kindle, and I think Shadewing's doing a way better job than I was anyway. :p 00:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Shadey? 04:08, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry guys. Got really busy. 20:54, January 24, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

It's been a few days without comments, let's go CBA  06:38, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting! The legs farthest from us are lighter than those closer. They should be darker. 17:50, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The neck shading could also be darkened, the head shading should go along with the light source, and the highlights should either be darkened, or the base coat should if you don't use them. 09:50, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I will get all those things done soon, but one thing concerns me. I just checked out his other blanks, and they are lighter than this. If I darken it anymore, it won't really match his other blanks. I will still darken, if that is what you wish, just bringing up a point. 23:54, January 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Eh, I'm not a huge fan of him right now. Comments? 21:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

I don't mean to rush or anything, but it's been a couple days without comment. 00:23, February 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Absolutely right. CBA? 01:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. 21:02, February 3, 2012 (UTC)