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Poppydawn (W) ~ Tweaked
OA's were Nightshine, Ive, and Breeze. She was tweaked to have a bushy tail. 21:40, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

This looks more ragged than bushy, imo. As I said on the alt, I think the tail should be more like Squirrelflight, or even Feathertail.

Use smoother lines that connect to each other more. If you want, I can redline for you? 22:23 Mon Nov 30

Yes, that would be helpful. 22:32, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

I think what you could do is make the tips less pointy, as fluffiness is intended to be rounder and more smooth, if you get what I mean? 16:32, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Here you go. I can do the other side as well, but I saw "something like Squirrelflight" and just did this. 08:34 Sat Dec 5

Withdrawing. I just don't feel like working on this. 16:05, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over 00:46, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

reups 02:16, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Try and follow Berry's guideline some more? 20:45, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

redlines are a guide, they dont have to be copied exactly. 10:55, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

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Lilyheart (K) - Tweaked
removed ginger. OA was Mounty. 04:01, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

can the facial shading be defined a little bit? 00:22 Tue Dec 8

Re-upped 00:41, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

She's dark, you need to darken her much much more 00:46, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

no not really she's darker than the other images and only needs to be darkened a little bit. 18:24, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes but shes specifically called a dark tabby and this does not look dark brown to me 21:08, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be darkened that much, honestly. It doesn't need to be near black in order to be dark brown.

Re-uploaded 00:37, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

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Blue Whisker (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA = me. Gosh I hate this

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