Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 135

Grassheart (Q) - Approved
Okay, I'm trying a tabby now This looks pretty bad. 12:27, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

You have to match this image. 12:47, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

This is great for your first tabby! Straighten some of the stripes, fix the ones on the head and it will be moving in the right direction. I love the fur behind the stripes...you don't want to see my first tabby... 13:47, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I tried to match her. I actually color-picked for the base color and earpink and tried to match the eye color. I think the issue is the stripes. I changed their color in an attempt to match the apprentice, and made them a little less smudged. I'm hesitant to change the head stripes, as they were done to match the apprentice, but thanks, Sunstream. I will re-up when I get the chance. 14:33, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

There is a layer of texture under the stripes, from what I can tell. For the stripes, I suggest them to flow with the curve of the body, especially the ones on her back, also, make them a tad denser to match the apprentice. 14:38, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Idk what you're talking about, there's no texture, but I did work on the stripes 16:38, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a tiny bit? They give it a furry like affect. You use GIMP, right? 16:54, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Yes, I use GIMP. And I smudge my stripes, so I smudged them some more instead. And I really don't want to blur or smudge them any more, as they aren't particularly blurred/smudged on Grassheart's apprentice. 18:25, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

What Burnt meant was there is supposed to be a layer of texture underneath the stripes on this image, since there appears to be one on the apprentice image. 18:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Oh, that makes perfect sense! I feel so stupid that I didn't realize what Burntclaw meant. I have now added a layer of texture. 20:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the texture? and maybe blur the tail shading a bit 21:12 Fri Apr 3

Re-upped 00:15, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the neck? 00:26, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I hope I got the right spot. 00:46, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

The texture is sharper on her apprentice image. Try using an airbrush on a darker color and run it over the image until it looks like texture. If you don't want to do that use a 1px pencil and run lines over your image, then use a 1px or 2px hard edged smudge tool and smudge them towards the direction of fur. 02:40, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! I tried using the airbrush method, so hopefully you can see the texture better. 14:42, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Ice, this is beautiful :) define the shading on the tail 06:27, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out shading on the stomach. 07:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! =) 14:00, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes nearing the top of the tail curve a bit more with the shape? It looks a bit to straight considering the lineart is bending at that certain spot. If you dont know where im talking about, i can try to provide you with a screenshot? 08:55, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped No, I'm pretty sure I got the right spot, tell me though if I didn't. 20:22, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Hollytuft (W) - Approved
I forgot how hard black cats are to shade. 10:41, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading to the back right paw and the front right paw. :) Cute <3 13:03, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! 16:46, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? Nice work! 21:01, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

For black cats, it would be nice to add in some highlights. Just sayin'. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:24, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:39, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a bit and I think you could probably blur it too- my monitor is showing that blocky shading that happens when the pelt clashes with the shading too much. It's not you, persay. I think it's my monitor, but I've found that tweaking the shading darkness usually fixes it.

Re-uploaded. 22:00, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

I can see nothing wrong with this, she matches the other images, and the shading looks super awesome. CBA?

Approved.