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Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Dull and blur the highlights, please.-- 00:45, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:51, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing. 19:21, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

They're showing for me. I don't know what the problem is, if it's on your end or what... 17:27, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the light on <-- visible leg.

Re-uploaded 14:37, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded fixing shading 14:40, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Is it my screen, or is there a square on her chest? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

I'm trying to fix that. 15:46, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. gosh 15:53, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. WAAASTEEE also featherwhisker is a dood 15:56, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
omg don't kill me for ruining Sparrow's images please 18:30 Tue Dec 9

Thin out the pale chest and define the shadin. This looks nice! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest edges into the fur more. He looks amazing, you did a fine job, Amber! 00:42, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the ear pink more. You made him purrty :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:51, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

the pale part on his face should only go up to his nose. 04:29, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks everybody ^-^ 18:03 Wed Dec 10

Define shading. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is dark enough. In fact, I think it could be lightened up a tad. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:31, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

It needs to be defined, defining doesn't just mean darkening. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:33, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a bit? I can't see the pattern through the shading. Nice job Amber. ^^ 01:52, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Just saw that Fox said that already. ^^ 01:58, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

Oops, forgot to reup ^^ 12:55 Mon Dec 15

Thin out the pale chest, also lighten it up to match his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 14:00, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up his shading, I can't see his pattern through it at all.-- 00:35, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Also, he needs a collar since he was a kittypet back then. Am I right? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:20, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

You would be correct, Fox. ^^ If they were kittypets when they were kits, then they should get the kittypet collar unless otherwise stated.

Reupssssssssss 17:35 Fri Dec 19

Lighten the shading on the left side of his body. So cute :3 (I like the collar) 17:46, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the collar lineart on this -> side of the body? 18:35, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki)~ For Approval
Woo~  First white cat (I really hope I did this right I don't wanna redo another charart :/) 11:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define ur light source. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:48, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up, too. It's making the white look pretty gray. 13:41, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

She's not supposed to be white. She should be a light color, hence why she looks off-white. The base from the kittypet is #E3E5E2. I'm also gonna rename this for you, since it should be File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png.

Should I change the pelt color then and reup? 11:17, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I suggest you to color pick off the apprentice image and just change the base color. The Fox Girl (talk) 13:18, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks hard edged, maybe blur it more? Then define it everywhere. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Meh that would put her back to where she is now. Just blur the edge of the shading dear, that should fix it up and save you a lot of stress. But define the depth just a tad, like darken it where the creases are and where there would be less light. You're doing wonderfully~ 02:33, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. The left paw and main body is telling me its coming from the <--- while the right paw and tail are telling me it's coming from --->. The head could use a little bit of shading, aswell. Perhaps just switch aroound the foreleg shading; or switch the tail or main body shading. 00:34, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Sorry I haven't been uploading recently. School, the upcoming holiday, bleh.. 14:09, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey, just as a head's up, don't align the images. It messes up the sections if too many are done at the same time. Define the light just a bit on <-- front leg.

Reups Gah sorry I must've not been paying attention 14:29, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Try adding some highlights or something- she's looking a bit on the grey side. This is very nice for a first white cat, though. ^^ 03:14 Fri Dec 19

Nevermind, I didn't see that she's supposed to be light-coloured, not white. Anyways, maybe define the shading just a little?

Reups Sorry about the confusion lol 14:42, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and chest shading a bit. ^^ 19:14, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, tbh. I can see them both clearly. Can you blur the shading a tad more, please?-- 06:11, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 13:55, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Jessy (Ki) ~ For Approval
I really meant for this to be up earlier whoops 18:43, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Make the collar larger, as it'd be pretty big on a kit. This is pretty! 22:46, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

The size itself is fine. Given that there are some pretty thin collars out there, they'd still appear "normal" sized on a kit. It's clear that this collar is too big for Millie because of how it's positioned. If it were too small, then it would probably be moved. This is also the lineart from my version of Millie's kit, and I was told that the size itself was okay to use.

The collar is fine. Define the shading on the left foreleg, please. 00:31, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:56, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on her right side is a bit dark compared to her front legs' shading, maybe lighten it up a bit? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:19, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading over there is fine, but I think the shading on the front legs could be defined, as I can't see it too well. 14:38, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still workin', Shoon? 01:29, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Lily (Ki) - CBA
my rabbit's name is Lily, too 19:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the brown just a bit? The face is really bright on the kittypet compared to the rest of her body.

Reups 19:21, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the face brown too? That looks a different color than the rest, and I'm pretty sure that's just one big highlight on her KP. It's such an old image wow

Make the collar larger since itd be pretty big on a kit. You did a lovely job! 22:47, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a touch. 2:25 Sun Dec 14 2014

Reups 21:08, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on the face? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:49, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I see it fine, and I'd much rather not. 15:09, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Can you thin out the lineart on --> side of the collar? It seems really thick.

Reups 16:04, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Dustpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
Ok, I don't know if chararts can be done in a day, but anyway, this is my first charart! I used PAINT.NET for this one. He's so cute! How can I improve? This is my first charart, so I may not be familiar with everything. BTW, how to make background color disapperar? I had trouble with that. Hope this helps! FireTail101 (talk) 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sign your posts with four tides plz. To remove the background, select the linear art, copy it, paste it onto ur base color layer, then use the magic wand tool and delete the background with control+x. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 23:58, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Plz match his other images by adding stripes as well. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups

The stripes are already there, just dark. U probably couldn't see them because of background. FireTail101 (talk) 00:13, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color and define the shading. Not bad for ur first charart! If You had seen my first charart, you'd laugh your head off. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:17, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Colour pick from one of the other Dustpelt images. Just be careful not to colour pick a shaded spot. Also with PAINT.NET, I leave the layers and save as a .pdn, then save again as a .png and that will make it one layer, making it easier to edit the waste. I leave the .pdn as multiple layers so I can edit it easier. This is great for first try! --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Stealthfire, I colourpicked each color from Dustpelt's apprentice image. FireTail101 (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I still think it's a bit dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

He's way to dark. He looks like a black cat on my screen, tbh. You can use  this to colorpick from; Because right now, he's so dark to the point i cant even see his stripes or lineart.

Use the medium brown on the bottom left as your base; while using the paler brown beside it for his pale parts. The pink is for his ears; and the orange/yellow in the middle is for his eyes. The darkest brown is for his stripes. Also, his nose needs to be black/dark brown to match his other images. 00:30, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups FireTail101 (talk) 02:08, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define/darken the stripes? I really can't see them. You're doing well! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Sure. FireTail101 (talk) 16:57, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base coat a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:23, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups - Darkened the stripes and lightened the base. Firetail 22:53, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Also, in terms of image approval, when do I become an apprentice? FireTail101 (talk) 01:27, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

When a senior warrior thinks you're ready, they will promote you. For now, thin out and add more stripes to match his other images. 06:16, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are a bit slanted compared to his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:05, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Redstar (Ki) - CBA
Well this turned out alright..I'm hoping I can get in one last image before I take off on my vacation, so let's do this! Comment away~ 03:07, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add another stripe or two to the shoulder/top of the arm? (this is what i mean) You don't have to, though. This is just a preference. ^^' 03:31, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah I'll do that in the morning. I almost added a stripe there but I wasn't sure if I should. But looking at it now its kind of weird to just have it blank. 04:23, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:40, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on --> front leg and on the tail.

Re-uploaded. 14:28, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Cherrytail (K) - CBA
Cherrytail is my babe, comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:18, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the chest white more. You did a great job! She's pretty =) 18:11, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Oh and I also see some waste next to the neck over ---> on this side. 20:43, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thank you! Question: Does she need a collar? Since she was a kittypet back then. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:07, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

You're welcome. And yes she would. 04:44, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Collars are evil XD By the way, I already got 4 images approved... When will I become a warrior? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:41, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Now, honestly. I couldn't figure out how many images you had approved, hence why I didn't promote you. I didn't realize you had a charart page, my apologies on the delayed promotion. ;-;

Okay let's comment on this... hmm, could you smudge the patches a bit? They appear smudged on her other images, but with this, I really can't tell because the blanks are so damn tiny.

Re-ups I smudged them as much as I can, and I rather not smudge them any further. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:18, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Falling Feather (Ki) - CBA
Hm. 22:31 Wed Dec 17

Smooth out the texture to match the other images? This is purrty! ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:30, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I did exactly what I did to this image what I did on the StarClanner, so I personally think it's fine. 21:47 Thu Dec 18

CBA?

Bess (Ki) ~ For Approval
hello naughty children it's darkness time. 03:17 Fri Dec 19

Brilliant! Define light on the tail? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but I couldn't do much without making the colour look funny. Also messed around with the white a tad because it was bugging me. 14:03 Fri Dec 19

Smudge the chest white a tad more. Hi Berry, welcome back! =) 14:31, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also adjusted the front paw shading a bit because it was bugging me. 14:27 Sat Dec 20

The shading is really dark on his right paw. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:21, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Shading darkness isn't required to match across the entire image. For all we know, that paw could be in some particularly dark part.

I think she's trying to say the shading is too dark on the white in that particular part. But I'm with you it could be a darker part it's hard to tell. 14:06, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Stormcloud (Ki) ~ For Approval
pls tell me I'm done with this set now 13:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading overall, then smooth it out. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 13:49, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think just smoothing it out would solve the problem. It doesn't distort the pattern in any way, shape, or form, and I can see it just fine.

I think it could be lightened just a shade over on the farthest side to our right ---> because I think it messes with the color a tad, and I can't really see the pattern through it. The rest is fine. I think this is the last one in the set Shinx lol 14:34, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

This computer makes shading appear so daaaarrrkk I'm glad my guess was almost ok 15:11, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Could u possibly smooth out the tail shading? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:22, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups It already was smooth, but ok 12:57, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading more on the legs? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:47, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

She smudges not blurs^^ and I think the shading in the ears could be lightened a shade. 14:11, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

reups 19:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) - For Approval
The kits taking over the world so here's a StarClanner :3 20:33, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

On the tail too. This is pretty! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups  Thanks:) 12:24, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Ratscar (Ki) - For Approval
I do not remember uploading this at all yesterday, I was that tired. All colors are from the elder.

Could you smooth out the shading on the tail? Niiicceee :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:19, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Amberclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
First tabby! XD Also, I'm an apprentice and I have had three images approved, is there anything else I need to do to become a warrior? --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:45, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Nothing at all. Three images is three images, so that means you'll be promoted.

Thankyou! --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:59, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Would you mind defining the light on the tail? This is niiiccceee ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:46, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:00, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Sunstar (W) ~ For Approval
I looovvvvvvvee Sunstar :p ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:12, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Hate to spoil it for you but the cite for a torn ear is very far into Bluestar's Prophecy, and he was only a warrior for a short amount of time at the start of the book, so can you remove the torn bit of the ear? --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:59, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, the cite is because he was addressed as a senior warrior. He was never once a warrior in Bluestar's Prophecy at all. I asked about the "senior warrior" cite counting for a warrior one, since the term 'warrior' was used, and that's why he gets it. Blur the tail shading.

Re-ups I was expecting that :| ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:19, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) ~ For Approval
Yeah... I don't know.

Could you define the ear pink on this ==> ear? Nice job :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:17, December 22, 2014 (UTC)