Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 56

Voletooth (A)--Approved


Revised Again! Any comments?Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is my 1st charart and I went off of the tutorial pages. Can you help me make this better? Hawkfur7 04:45, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the paint and blur messed up the lineart and I don't know how to fix it. Suggestions?Hawkfur7 04:57, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Layer over another line art. This is really good for your first charart! The eye colour needs to be fixed-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:00, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Adding to that, the image is a little too red. Copy the colour from his elder image and use that-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:06, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the eyes a lighter shade of green? Is that what you meant? Because I based his eyes off of his warrior picture.Hawkfur7 05:16, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

If I'm making him his elder color, do you want me to make the stripes a darker brown or keep them as is?Hawkfur7 05:25, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Use all the colours from his elder image. For the way the eye should look go here and look under the eye section-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:23, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a more natural color. Sil ver paw Chase that mouse!  19:03, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Not bad for a first image :) First thing first, the eyes don't have their line art anymore and most of our images keep their lineart of the eyes. When you re-add the lineart like Nightshine said, you should good to go with that. Make the ear pink the same color as his warrior and elder image. His colors look closer to his warrior image so it seems fine, but of course those don't technically match the color of his elder image as they're lighter. Then there's the highlights on his tail, just burn those a little as they're too bright against the rest of his fur.--Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:04, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * How about now?Hawkfur7 04:10, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg. Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg. Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Converting might not help...and I just noticed that you named the file wrong too. Change it too Voletooth.apprentice.png if I'm correct I believe--Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:37, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, the weird thing is, I did save it as a png file, not a jpg. But, I resaved and renamed as a png file, just to be sure. It should be fine now.Hawkfur7 05:41, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * I also made him more of his elder colors, but lighter. And I fixed the lineart on his body and on his eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 05:49, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

He stills looks .jpg...I'm afraid even I have never found a way to undo this. However, I got the reverted version here:

Now I suggest just redoing him with this one, that way you won't have to start from scratch--Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:53, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

How do you layer over another line art? Because I'm using Pixlr, and everytime I add a layer, it just deletes the one I was working on.Hawkfur7 06:11, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. I figured it out how to layer over another lineart using GIMP2.Hawkfur7 19:40, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I reuploaded the modified png image you posted, and it's at the top. Better?Hawkfur7 02:16, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hello...? :(Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anyone there?...Hawkfur7 09:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. Blur the ear pink just slightly more, but other than that it looks great! : Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:10, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''At the top. I blurred the ear pink more. Is it good to go?Hawkfur7 21:50, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to ask Bramble, but it looks good to me! Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:55, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye and add stripes to the tail. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:00, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''at the very top. I added stripes to the tail and fixed the eyes a little. How is it now?Hawkfur7 02:09, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. at the very top. I also brightened/darkened him with the burn/dodge tool, just to give him a little more depth.Hawkfur7 05:32, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try using This to see a way to do eyes. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:16, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 06:51, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made his spine a little darker to add depth and around his haunches. Now, how is it?Hawkfur7 05:30, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The eye still seems off to me. It's too square. Besides that darken the shadinag on the legs faruthest from us. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:21, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe on his head, and make the shorter stripes longer. Also, highlight the tail and front legs. FrostHeart 02:57, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, the highlights are unessessary. Quailflight 09:25, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. how about now?

It looks like there is blurred line art around the tail. Fix the eye again.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:25, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Are the eyes better? I also fixed most of the problem areas on the tail.Hawkfur7 21:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I also blurred the stripes a little more because they seemed to bold.Hawkfur7 21:50, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the ear pink, the eyes, the stripes, and the tail. Are there any more mistakes? Comments?Hawkfur7 05:49, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Look Here for a tutorial on eyes.The rest of the image is nice though! $ Coolstar  $  19:05, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I finally fixed the eyes! How is the ihis flankmage now?Hawkfur7 07:03, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Much better.There are two little dots on his flank... $ Coolstar  $  19:58, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I removed the two dots from his flank and covered it up the most I can. How is he now?Hawkfur7 04:29, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I put more stripes on his flank to cover up the removal of the two dots.Hawkfur7 00:11, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Nice Job. I think he's ready. CBA? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  00:18, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bram ble 15:43, June 5, 2010 (UTC)