Warriors Wiki talk:Books/Discussion Archive 22

Rising Storm/Prologue ~ CBV
I'm a bit unsure about the names in the Characters section but that might just be me. So, comments?  14:43 Sunday March 3 2013

Can you format the character list as seen in the rest of the articles? I also think, as for the ShadowClan medicine cat, it would be Runningnose, would it not? Along with Nightstar, and Cinderfur as well. I think. Don't hold me to it, as I may be wrong.

Still working on this, Tawny?

Yeah, I'm still working on it. Sorry I got so busy I couldn't be on. I changed Runningnose and Nightstar's names in the character list and I don't think Cinderfur is in it because I would have written him in as the deputy. And what do you mean by formatting it like the other articles?  00:46 Saturday March 30 2013

I think she means in the Characters section, you use Mclist like so (When there's more then 3 cats I'm guessing

I may be wrong though, of course, I guess looking at other subpages would help too x3. 01:03, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

Again, still working?

Yep, still working. I'll tackle that Characters section right now.  23:57 Monday April 9 2013

Finished the Characters section.  21:06 Friday April 12 2013

Shall we go CBV?

Long Shadows/Chapter 5 ~ CBV
So, yeah. Comments?

CBV?

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 1 ~ CBV
I found this floating around, and turns out I did it. So, comments?  21:56 Thursday April 11 2013

It appears there are some direct quotes, although not actually "quoted", so to say. Could you possibly fix that? Take for example Fireheart's conversation with Crowfur. There are a few things said in those couple paragraphs that appear to be directly from the book. Try paraphrasing, if possible. This is extremely detailed for a chapter one subpage. o.o Nicely done.

All right, I searched the summary and fixed all that up, and I also reworded a few things unrelated to that.  21:22 Friday April 12 2013

CBV?

The Forgotten Warrior/Chapter 10 ~ CBV
Just linked a few things in the summary, and looks fine otherwise. Comments?  00:08 Friday April 12 2013

Format the character list, please. It should follow the formatting laid out, even if there are only a couple characters within that section.

Okay, I think I fixed that up.  21:25 Friday April 12 2013

CBV?

The Forgotten Warrior/Chapter 1 ~ CBV
It was almost done when I worked on this... So, comments?  00:01 Saturday April 13 2013

CBV?