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Healer Blanks- For Approval
Oh boy, I hoped these are uploaded right Malina457 (talk) 03:50, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Sorry for the stupid question, but do these need to be pixelated? It doesn't look like it, but also, maybe lengthen the short haired tail? Good job! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 03:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make a littttle bid wider in the stomach/flank area? They look a bit skinny atm. Great job though! 04:04, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I can't make them pixalated Malina457 (talk) 04:23, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Eventually, this will need to be pixelated. So before these are CBA'd, we will have to ask one of our users to pixalate them for you. 04:32, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I've removed the |300px from the end of your image code. It's modifying the true size of the image, and on the approval page it needs to appear as it really is, so others can see what they'll be working with (in this case, the modifier was showing an altered size from the original). Please crop both of these as well and shrink them to be the size they'd appeared to be before, but weren't 04:46, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I'll do my best, will upload tomorrow Malina457 (talk) 04:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I can try and make them not so blurry when I'm not aboutt to pass out. I'll have to kinda re-draw them, maybe. Malina457 (talk) 05:44, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Would you like me to redline them for you? 9:42 Mon Aug 13 2018

If you wouldn't mind, I would really appreciate it Malina457 (talk) 13:15, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you make the longhair's tail more bushy? :D  HA WK FI RE98  18:25, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I edited the longhair, shorthair will be done later Malina457 (talk) 21:36, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reupsedited both Malina457 (talk) 21:45, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you make the front legs a little longer? I think they would be the same length as the hind legs in that pose. 14:32, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reups How's that? Malina457 (talk) 15:12, August 14, 2018 (UTC)Malina

These could still be shrunk some, our tallest all hit just under 200, so it could be scaled back a 100 pixels height-wise from where it is now. This is to prevent distortion in the infobox, if it's too large wikia will start to mess with it. Also, there's still a good amount of empty space surrounding these, which should be cropped out. 19:24, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

 Reups: I tried, hope they aren't too blurry Malina457 (talk) 20:20, August 14, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reups tried something with the short fur Malina457 (talk) 01:06, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The longhair looks blurry. 03:37, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

This might just be me, but their torsos look very long. The haunches should try and match the shoulders a bit in height. The long hair's fluff lineart looks a bit thick compared to the shorthair. The back paws are also curved a bit too much when they come down from the haunches, but that might be me nitpicking about style. These look really cute, just need some anatomy touchups imo. ♥ --Echo (Talk) 04:00, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

i will fix these when i can Malina457 (talk) 21:11, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

What do you mean by the torso? Malina457 (talk) 21:44, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I fixed everything else Malina457 (talk) 22:15, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I think Echo means that their bodies look a little too long in the middle (like how a weenie dog is long). I have to agree with her on that, but these blanks are looking really good otherwise.  HA WK FI RE98  04:04, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah I meant their abdomen. Torso isn't really the right term for cats -- my bad! But yeah, other than making their bodies a lil less longer these look great! -- 04:24, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, ok XD (uploading later) Malina457 (talk) 12:17, August 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups Malina457 (talk) 21:41, August 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Are these drawn with the binary tool? The lineart looks very pixely when it should be smooth and flat. 23:56, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

I tried to make them pixelated Malina457 (talk) 01:55, August 19, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups for waste Malina457 (talk) 02:15, August 19, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Let's not worry about pixelating the blanks until the end. Anyways, could you make the belly of the long-haired blank for fluffy? 12:58, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Malina457 (talk) 13:48, August 19, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Can you make the line art for the whiskers and herbs, and paws thiner on the short haired one? Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

reups Malina457 (talk) 02:27, August 21, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I think the line art on the hind leg that separates it from the tail and main body isn't needed. You've done a great job on these, Malina^^

13:34, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe enlarge the heads a bit? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 16:43, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Thanks patch, :D Malina457 (talk) 21:19, August 21, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Are these pixelated? I can't really tell.

No, I don't think they are, I did attempt though Malina457 (talk) 11:47, August 22, 2018 (UTC)Malina

They're still not pixelated. I pixelated the current version of the blanks and uploaded it here, but they also took a hit in quality. I can email the separate files to you, Malina, if you wish to edit it further. Regardless, these are really coming along. Good job! 17:51, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

reups Thank you so much for pixelating them branch, i tweaked them slightly Malina457 (talk) 21:09, August 22, 2018 (UTC)Malina

perhaps make the muzzle a bit longer and the nose dip inwards a wee bit more than it is rn? and thicken the lineart on the back and stomach of the shorthairs, they look thinner compared to the rest of it. 21:14, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

You're welcome! It seems you're using a brush with anti-aliasing? Make sure to turn that off if you want to keep it in its current state. (Or just use the pencil tool, depending on what program you're using to make these). 23:00, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

For the muzzle part, which blank? Malina457 (talk) 01:26, August 23, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Can you thicken the lineart for the long-haired? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 01:50, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

reups for short Malina457 (talk) 02:02, August 23, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups Malina457 (talk) 02:19, August 23, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Yeah, those noses are not matching Malina457 (talk) 02:45, August 23, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Crowfrost (Kit) ~ For Approval
this was realy hard to do, well it is only like my third one, so of corse it was hard

Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

This is pretty! I'll only say that you have to remove the background (the white outside the outline / lineart) and remove the "|thumb" part from the image link. Good luck! ◇ Bounce frost spam eats us and we eat spam  03:47, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Done Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

Nice! Define the shading on the white parts.  HA WK FI RE98  13:16, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

You need to upload this as File:Crowfrost.kit.png, and you need to reserve this on the reservation table. ^^ 16:30, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Correct the blurred lineart on the paws, and I've removed the |left alignment off your image, do try not to readd it because it messed up the page. 16:46, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

the white on the front paws don't go that high, they only stay on the paws. also define the shading, I can't see it. 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​

Sorry about the shading, Im still new to this, is this good? Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

The lineart is still blurred pretty much all around the image, this needs to be fixed. It has to stay solid black all the way around, with no waste outside such as here where it's leaking over the blurred lines. The eyes for this also need to be green to match the first two images in the set. I'm not sure why the StarClan is mismatched, but the warrior came first so this needs to match that and the star needs that altered. 19:21, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

You'll fix a lot of problems on this image by using layers. It seems like you aren't, hence why everything looks blurred together. Check out the tutorials to see what I mean. I suggest you to create layers for the base color, white, earpink and shading separately. It just makes it so much easier to work with. I'm also wondering which program you're using for this.

Im sorry about not doing layers, the program I use, makes it somewhat hard to do layers, and if I were to do layers, I would need to re-do the whole thing. Should I just do that? because makeing this wasnt that hard, so I can re-do it if you want, and dont answar, Im re-doing it anyways. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

Okay, re-did it with layers. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

Good! :D Your lineart problem is fixed now. It's good to get into the habit of using layers. Blur/smudge the ear pink a bit and define the shading. Kit blanks are nortoriously for being a bit tricky. 20:15, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

So kits will always be tricky, kits or art, and this is like my first, so why did I do something hard? oh I didnt want to do a hunter, tell me to do something more simple next time please. [https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] (Me talking about cats)

I think your highlight layer or whatever it is may be above the lineart layer? 20:22, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

a bit is an understatement vec I think there might be waste, could just be my eyes though. Brighten up the chest and forehead white. 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​

Erase some of the shading on the chest to do what ^ Star said.

Make sure to let everyone know that you re-uploaded. ^^ There's waste around the image. 13:08, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

re-uploaded, also, the program Im using has been acting wird, randomly freeezing, and I loose all my progress, sorry if it takes me a while to get it up, I try to re-do it evrey time I see a note in this part, but it still might take me a while. So aigain, sorry. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Brighten up the white, especially on the chest, it looks gray, smooth out the earpink, and smooth out the shading. 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​

re-uploded, please stop telling me to fix the gray, the only way to fix that now, is re-doing the entire thing aigain, tell me if I should do this. And I dont mind, others have noted it before, so Im telling you, I dont have emotion when making art for others, just tell me what to do, and Ill do it, and no this is not a problem, I do have emotions, so tell me what to do. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

The shading is leaking on the <- leg. Also, could you define the shading on the tail? Keep up the good work, you're doing great. ^^ 20:56, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-done, thanks, Im glad to hear, well, see, Im doing good! Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Hmm, I still can't see the tail shading. Could you try putting your shading layer's (assuming you have one) setting on multiply? It should make the shading appear darker. 00:34, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

smooth out the chest shading, and if you're having trouble brightening the white, then try shading in the white on a different layer. worked for me. 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ thanks, I didnt think of that, Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, this is the best I can do with the white, and the best for the tail, tell me to re try if if you need, I can try, but I dont want to mess it up. thanks for the suggestions, they realy work! Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Dull down the green/blue in the shading a little? It's looking neon right now. Remove some of the light that's on his face, it's making him almost look a different shade of color. I'm not really seeing much color in his eyes, can you define it?

13:46, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up(aigain), Im as good as asleep, I stayed up till like 3 am, working on this! Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, I re-did it, all of it, I think it is better now. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

this is looking excellent so far. please add some shading to the hind paw and it's leaking away from the lineart on the chest --> that side. 21:24, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

This looks great! I think his eyes are yellow on his other images. Also, maybe extend the white to the chin underneath the mouth? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 21:58, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, And no, Im not tired of doing this, its fun, keep up the requests untel its perfect. And Ravenpaw99, my requests at around the top, it origanaly had yellow eyes, on it. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Idk why my comment got deleted but some green bled outside the eye lineart. The waste pixels in my previous comments are gone tho. ^^ Only things I'd suggest is make sure that the colour doesn't bleed out of the lineart when you blur and the black parts seem to be lacking shading on the body. 22:22, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, Please dont tell me there is waste, because there isnt, I made shure like 10 times. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Smooth out the shading, especially on the hind paw. And the shading seems to be leaking on the front paws. 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​

Its not leaking, its me failing with shading. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

What program do you use for your chararts? And do you use a mouse or a tablet? 23:41, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth the black on the shading? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 23:41, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Here's a lil guide on shading for this. I tried to match it to what you were doing already. Do your shading with a small pixel brush on a different layer above your flat colouring and gently blur it down so it doesn't bleed through. ^^ Also, there's tiny grey flecks of waste surrounding the image, but it's suuper faint so I might be nitpicky. I've circled them out for you - you should probably change the background to white for a second so you can see them better. I hope this helps !! 23:51, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

I use Photopea and I use the toutch pad on you compeutar, yup, and my brother has 2 mice, (the ones for the compeutar), and wont let me use ethir, and I use Photopea, because I was looking for a program, and I randombly found it. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Try using GIMP ^^ It's a bit easier and from what I know most people here use it along with Paint Tool Sai? The layers and the selection tool will help make things easier and help keep waste from leaking out. 02:49, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

sorry, I cant, Ive tryed, and I cant get eithir of those, so... sorry, my computar is anoying, anything else? Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

This is looking better and better! There's still some [ flecks of waste] about the image and the shading shouldn't over dominate on the white paws. The shading is also a bit too dark on the back paw. Other than that this looks cute! 03:53, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry if this takes longer, I just found the blanket my cat loved sleeping on befor she died. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, Yes, I know and Im sorry that took longer than 2 seconds, sorry. Im diying of laghfing from that. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Use a smaller brush to blur the shading as it appears to leak a lot on the neck. (suggested: 5 if on GIMP) The shading shouldn't recede from the linear art.

Define the shading on the head? 13:00, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, just tell me. I know its terrible. Keep coments comeing, so my art isnt this terible anymore. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Base color needs to be darker, it has to match the color of his other images. 20:54, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

You're doing better I promise! It takes time. There's a bunch of waste surrounding the image and the lineart has been blurred due to the highlights/shading leaking over into it. 21:22, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

In this image, he looks more like a gray cat than a black cat. Darken the fur quite a bit (not the white parts, just the black).  HA WK FI RE98  15:10, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, I am sorry about that... whatever it was. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

This looks great so far! Add some lighting to the paws? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 23:42, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, done. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

I think there's some waste on the head. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 16:41, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Im pretty sure that there isnt, at least I cant see it. Owlbite 18:34, August 21, 2018 (UTC)Owlbite

There's a little bit of waste closest to --> ear. I can see it if I tip my laptop screen. ​​​​

Wow, I can bearaly see it, Im on my tablet, but Ill fix it when I get home. Owlbite 21:30, August 21, 2018 (UTC)Owlbite Re-up, Fixed. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

I suggest you to lower the opacity of the shading overall. It's still leaking on the neck and back foot, meaning that the shading is receding away from the linear art when it's not supposed to. You're improving a lot on this image, though!

I will do this, but what do you mean by "leaking"? Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, done. Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Leaking is a term we use to describe when something, usually the shading layer, is absent from an area. Usually this happens when an artist blurs too much near the lineart, so the shading layer ebbs away from that area. Your shading is supposed to meet the lineart, so it's best to blur away from the lineart. But that can be difficult with smaller blanks, such as the kit blank. It's a common mistake everyone makes.

Leaking can also be used to describe waste outside the charart, but the former option is more common. 16:28, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, I killde some waste to. Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Eagle Feather (Hunter) - For Approval
05:03, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit? Malina457 (talk) 12:16, August 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

can you keep the shadeing consistant? It looks difrent on the neck than the other places. [https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] (Me talking about cats)

I'm gonna provide a second opinion and say that the shading looks fine. Btw, thanks for taking over xD  HA WK FI RE98  18:05, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading a bit. I also think the tail shading needs defining (since I'm not sure the "shading is fine" comment was at everything or just Owlbite's comment)... and could you perhaps blur the tail stripes just a tiny bit? That was the plan with the kit image. ​​​​​​

Also maybe add some shading to the part of the chest where the legs meet? Malina457 (talk) 00:03, August 17, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you define the shading depth? 00:35, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Not sure what you mean by "keep the shading consistent." 07:07, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

I mean to keep it the same, it looked darker on the neck, but it looks like you fixed that, mostly. [https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Define the light on the front leg closest to us?

13:49, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on tail blends in with the stripes. Could you define the shading/make it darker on the tail? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 23:42, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:54, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Your source is confusing, especially on the legs. The shading at the front legs should be consistent.

Re-uploaded: 14:27, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

The shading's leaking away from the lineart slightly at the elbow where it meets the belly^^ 19:22, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 13:28, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

The source is still inconsistent. All the legs should have their shading --> on that side, given the shading placement on the face.

Juniper Branch (Hunter) ~ For Approval
I seriously can't tell if her other images have texture.

they don't. on my ones, it's just the shading. 11:18, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

I see, thank you. I know that Beebs usually puts a base layer of texture on her images and I couldn't tell if she did it on this one since the base is really, really dark.

The belly should be that purplish color, unless it's hidden by the shading. 13:14, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

hm mightve forgotten about beebs' rogue (somehow) so I dunno about that, but I think the blackish areas are a bit too dark on here anyway. I suppose if you can't see it unless you squint close up at it it does't matter too much anyway 18:43, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

It might just me, but I think the body should have more grey to match the others, or just more filled in. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

This pattern is so cool! I think the amount of gray on her body is fine, but I think her other images have patches that are more sharp/textured than the ones on your charart.  HA WK FI RE98  02:39, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tried doing it with a 1px brush.

I think there should be another splotch or two of the golden/grey where the black splotch in by the belly? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 18:28, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

What Ravenpaw said is what I ment. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Nettle (Hunter) - For Evaluation
It's horrible but oh well I tried. Storm Storm-in-Rain (talk) 04:04, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

don't forget your sig. anyways, add shading, define the texture on the legs and add some eye depth. 01:58, 8/18/2018 ​

Maybe lighten the earpink? If you look at the previous four images, he has pale pink earpink, not darker pink. Also, it might be just me, but I think there's a little waste on the underside of the tail near the tip and on the belly. --

there are some great tutorials on how to add shading. Nice texture though.

It’s not horrible! Nice effort. There’s waste all around the image, please remove it. 07:32, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?

14:36, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

Moss Tail (Hunter) - For Approval
It's terrible. Just wanted to get this up. Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 04:36, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Can you try to match the ear pink to the other ones, and can you make the lineart by the ear black? and can you make the neck shading match the darknes of the rest of the shading. Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Re-uploaded Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 08:14, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs, belly, and tail? Not bad. :) 13:05, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Not bad at all. The ear pink still needs to be lightened a lot more. It also looks like it's leaking onto the back of his other ear and his head.  HA WK FI RE98  22:02, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Add some light to the eyes? 22:27, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 08:14, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Darken the shading everywhere save for the shoulder and neck, and recede it to cover less space on the visible haunch. 00:33, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Add some shading in the ears. 00:47, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 08:14, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

I think the shading could be darkened still on the face, legs, and ears, and perhaps smooth it on the visible shoulder? 11:14, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 08:52, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Add some more shading...here and add a tiny bit of white (called light) in the pupil where the red is. :) You're so close! 16:54, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Thorn (Hunter) ~ CBA
I hope this is okay? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 23:49, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

This is adorable, maybe smooth the body shading a bit Malina457 (talk) 00:06, August 20, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Re-ups. Thank you! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 01:38, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Holy crap this is so good, define the belly shading and maybe the hind legs too? ahhh I love the texture and the mange and the ripped ears it's just 😩👌 02:29, 8/20/2018 ​ 02:29, 8/20/2018 ​ 02:29, 8/20/2018 ​ 02:29, 8/20/2018 ​ 02:29, 8/20/2018 ​ 02:29, 8/20/2018 ​

Re-ups. Really, it means a lot. It took me like an hour or two just to get the texture and lineart right! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 02:43, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Very good! Define the shading/light source on the furthest hind leg. 19:00, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-ups. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 21:15, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Excellent work. Smooth the shading on the back leg farthest from us?

00:30, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

It is blurred, it's just the texture! But I can if you would like. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 09:34, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

eh your call.

22:00, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Should I? Second opinion? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 01:14, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

I like it this way, but sitll, do what you want. Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

I'll leave it, if that's okay ! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 02:17, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

I think you should smooth it out a tiny bit, and the eyes look gray... more gray than the others, and you make it look a little less gray? Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Re-ups.So sorry about the mishap! I redid the texture on the leg and smoothed it out more! So much better! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 04:04, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 16:30, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Spikefur (Unknown) - CBA
I love what I did with the eyes lmao they're creepy

His eyes look cool! Maybe expand the shading on the tail and haunches and maybe add more spikes to his face, facing up if possible? If not, ignore this comment. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 01:39, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did add spikes to the top of his head, but I don't really know if I can add more than that, and I expanded the shading (or at least I tried to, I'm not used to these blanks yet.) ​​​​​​

Maybe blur the shading on his flank more. Looking nice! Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 09:43, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

His eyes aren't creepy, they're awesome! The shading on the front leg facing us doesn't look quite right to me. Perhaps you can extend it up more towards the shoulder area and not towards the face?  HA WK FI RE98  15:07, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not sure I like it with that shading on the arm. Huh. ​​​​

I think it looks good like this but if other people think that it looks better the other way, you can change it back. ^^  HA WK FI RE98  18:40, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Okay, how did you do that with the eyes? And, there is waste above the front paw closest to us. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-uploaded. I've seen people try this with other blanks, so I wondered if it would work here too, Owl. That's all. ​

CBA?

01:29, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (Lo) - For Approval
i'm happy with the result but can't tell if it matches well enough.

16:23, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Would you mind defining the eye depth and adding a dorsal stripe? (or defining it, couldn't see) This is very pretty^^ 18:10, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thank you

18:21, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste on the back end. This is amazing! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 18:27, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thank you. remember when i said "um how do you add waste? idon't know howw"

18:31, August 20, 2018 (UTC) I feel like the warrior has some sort of blurring/smudging with a low rate (which i have no idea how Mounty accomplished that, I'm guessing it could be a brush). The stripes here look too hard edged

Re-uploaded.

23:21, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the head, I cant see it. Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Re-uploaded.

00:26, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

It might be just my screen, but I can't see any color in her eyes  HA WK FI RE98  15:03, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

I can bearaly see the color in the eyes, can you please fix that? Owlbite 19:00, August 21, 2018 (UTC)Owlbite

Re-uploaded.

20:44, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Probably gonna get killed for this, but CBA? I really like this. ​​​​​​

I will always hate breaking a CBA, but you're missing the notched ear :P 23:36, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

00:00, August 22, 2018 (UTC) May be shot, but the warrior image doesn't have a dorsal stripe. And the stripes are rather more... patterned, I would say. I don't think the other images match the warrior that well, TBH.

Could you define the white chest and ear pink? I love your shading! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 04:08, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thanks. So should I do anything to the stripes?

14:35, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

Yes. To match the warrior, I believe they need to be more jagged? 19:02, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. redid the stripes.

15:40, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

I know it's a different side, but the stripes appear more smudged sporadically on the warrior. We're getting there! 16:39, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

16:52, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Needletail (Unknown) - For Approval
I'll mess with the texture. Just wanted to get this posted. 21:46 Mon Aug 20

Can you shape the white to mach the others? Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Maybe smooth out the shading? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 13:26, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

Her other images appear to be a little lighter.  HA WK FI RE98  14:54, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

The color discrepancy is from the texture being off. I'll fix it once my computer is charged 15:01 Tue Aug 21

You mind lightening the shading a little while you are at it?

Reuploaded 17:44 Wed Aug 22

This is stunning! Especially the eyes. Do you mind defining the ear pink a little bit? 17:55, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth a little? 21:15, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

Pink Eyes (Hunter) ~ For Approval
20:54, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is absolutely BRILLIANT. The only thing I see is that you could darken the ear pink a little bit to match his other images.  HA WK FI RE98  02:52, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

And can you please try to make the ear pink go farther down, what Hawkfire said was what I was thinking, but I couldnt bring myself to say anything about this masterpice. Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Maybe smooth out the shading overall? This is fantastic! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 04:06, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded thanks, I tried. 19:11, August 22, 2018 (UTC)

maybe lighten the eyes to make it pink? Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 09:44, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

they are pink though? I colour picked it from his other images. 09:46, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

The eyes are already pink, but I do believe they appear paler on the rogue and es. Granted, that could be because of the different eye sizes, so you could do either. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 16:49, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Given David's made at least one other image for this that I can remember, I think it just has to do with the size difference for the eyes. The colors are looking fine to me. ​

Willow Tail (Hunter) ~ For Approval
mehhhhhh I'm not sure if I like the end result of this 02:58, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

She's beautiful! Define the shading on the legs and tail? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 03:36, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

It looks like in her other images her chest, muzzle, and paws are a little lighter than her pelt. Can you match those?  HA WK FI RE98  13:24, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did the shading, but this already has the pale parts from the other images - and I'm not really able to define them further since they're already the same color as the rest of the set. 19:03, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

The pale around the muzzle should extend to the eyes a bit to match the other images. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 19:07, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Lioneye (Unknown) ~ For Approval
More shading practice, also pattern practice :') 12:12, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Beautiful pattern omg. Define and darken the shading a bit. Leaf (DTC) Hm? Ah, shoot! I didn’t! She can have this if she wants, I didn’t realize we had to ask ^^’ 17:52, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

Leaf (DTC) (Hunter) -For Approval
Oh my goodness was this hard Malina457 (talk) 00:50, August 24, 2018 (UTC)Malina