Warriors Wiki talk:Books

Russian Cover
So there's this russian cover that's for both Into the Wild and Fire and Ice. Does it go on both gallery pages? Sorry that I'm so lost and don't know lol

If it's used for both books, then I would think it should be displayed on both pages, with some kind of note saying it's for both Into the Wild and Fire and Ice.

But there are lots of books like that that combine all the books in one of the series or something and they don't get covers? imo I think it shouldn't be in the gallery, but that's just what I think. 14:24 Fri May 6

Idk, I think it needs to go somewhere but I don't know where. I'm gonna go look into if there are any other ITW and FAI combos, to see if we could look into a section somewhere or something.

It could possibly go in the box set page. 17:43, May 6, 2016 (UTC)

There is a German combo too. And I think putting it in the box set is a good idea, and it could go in the book's publication history too. 18:00 Fri May 6

So what are we doing with this? Box set and publication page? 18:02, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 01:09, May 22, 2016 (UTC)

I think that box set and publication history sounds good. 02:16 Sun May 22

So we're in agreement that the russian cover should go on the box set page, and it should go into both books' publication history? 13:57, June 4, 2016 (UTC)

Poking this again. 03:59, June 12, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, there doesn't seem to be any issues with adding it, but since it is for two different books, I still think it should go in the gallery. If there are other combination ones that aren't added, then they probably should be, as it's still technically a cover for each respective book.

The Apprentice's Quest - Silver Nomination
Right, should I add the bonus scene as a section? It's only included in B&N books, but I do think it needs a section the page as all DOTC books have them. 14:43, June 10, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah I think you should add it, since it is part of the story

Yes I'm still working, I just lost my copy of TAQ and can't find the PDF online so I just ordered it and it should be here within a few days. 14:27, June 18, 2016 (UTC)

Does anyone have a PDF for this? 05:39, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

I do. I can send it to you via Skype, but there is only Chapter 1 of Thunder and Shadow. No TAQ bonus scene. Jaysnow (talk) 05:45, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Blurbs
hi nerds. I was stalking and I'm kinda curious. Is there a reason we don't cite the blurbs for unreleased novels, such as Thunder and Shadow, Hawkwing's Journey, and other new and upcoming items? We cite everything else on the page, so wouldn't citing something as important as that be something we should start doing? I could see not citing the ones for books that've already been released, since all you'd have to do is check the back (or insert if you have a hardcover) of your books... but for new ones? I think it might be good to start citing them...since they've been changed and updated on an average of at least two or three times before the official book release.

Yeah I definitely agree, the blurbs should have cites.Tbh, I'm actually surprised that the wiki doesn't cite them already. 04:33 Thu Jun 16

May as well, since we cite everything else on the page

Is this agreed that we cite the blurbs? 06:19, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

The Ultimate Guide/Half Moon Speaks ~ Silver Nomination
Haven't done anything for PB in a while. Comments?

Comments before vote? 01:33, July 21, 2016 (UTC)

I'm really sorry about interrupting the CBV, but maybe link 'the territories' (between Highstones...) in the 1st paragraph as 'The Forest Territories'? Also, could you link 'a lake' (also in the 1st paragraph) to either The Lake or The Lake Territories? In the second paragraph, could you link 'river' as 'River Chell'? 08:56 Thu Jul 21

Updated

CBV? 20:51 Sun Jul 24

Vote's up. 21:57 Sat Jul 30

Moth Flight's Vision/Chapter 5 ~ Silver Nomination
Comments?

Comments before vote? 01:33, July 21, 2016 (UTC)

Again, I am sorry about interrupting your CBV, Spooky, but 2 things:


 * In the 1st paragraph, it says 'she thinks of how easily her mother could catch one'. Maybe link 'Windstar' as 'her mother' instead of as 'Wind Runner' in the following paragraph.


 * In the 3rd paragraph, "He looks at her fondly, and says he'll eat the toad, fretting at how she hadn't eaten much of it and invites her to eat more, commenting that a full belly will keep her warm." Could you split this sentence in two? It seems a bit long, and might be a run-on. 09:04 Thu Jul 21

Updated

CBV? 20:51 Sun Jul 24

Vote's up. 21:57 Sat Jul 30

Sunset/Chapter 18 ~ Silver Nomination
It's been such a long time since I've done anything for PB... anyway, no one's working on it, and it seems okay for a nominaton. Comments? 13:41, July 22, 2016 (UTC)
 * In the seventh and eighth paragraphs, could you perhaps use "He" a little less? It seems slightly redundant. The first sentence of the 7th paragraph could also be split in two.
 * Can you add cites for the rest of the character list? Half of them of them are showing up as blank source cites.
 * Is there a quote you can add?

Updated Is this any better? 22:35, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

Looks good, but there's still one character without a cite down near the bottom

Updated Done. Also, converted Leafpool to a mentioned character, since she's pretty much only mentioned. 01:48, July 23, 2016 (UTC)


 * In the I think 4th paragraph, " Hawkfrost looks at him, waiting to respond, and he murmurs something. It says he didn't want to agree to anything until he had time to think it through." I'm a bit confused on who 'it' is.
 * In the 6th paragraph, maybe link 'Brambleclaw's Territory' as ThunderClan or The_Lake_Territories. And can you link 'ShadowClan territory' (same paragraph) as ShadowClan or The_Lake_Territories
 * In the 6th paragraph, " Hawkfrost confirms that Brambleclaw won't forget the meeting, and he assures his half-brother he won't." Could you reword this, I'm a bit confused on if both brothers are promising that they won't forget, or if Hawkfrost is asking Brambleclaw if he won't forget, etc.
 * In the 7th paragraph, "Brambleclaw says thanks, then says he'd be loyal to his Clan as long as he had enough breath to fight." 'says' in the paragraph twice sounds redundant, maybe have it be like 'Brambleclaw thanks her, ...'
 * In the last paragraph, 'tease' is a bit redundant. 08:25 Sat Jul 23

Updated Okay, any more comments? My baby is growing up :D Well, more like adopted. 12:45, July 23, 2016 (UTC)

CBV? 21:55 Sat Jul 30

Twilight/Chapter 7 - Silver Nomination
01:32, July 23, 2016 (UTC)
 * In the beginning, there are some "choppy" sentences where 'she' is also redundant.
 * In the 3rd paragraph, "Squirrelflight thinks that she would like to be his mentor, but guesses she needs to think before she does something " I think it would be better if it was 'but she guesses she needs to think before acting'.
 * Also in the 3rd, "She feels a rush of admiration for the tom..." Could you say 'tom-kit' so that it is more clear that it is Birchfall? At first I thought it was talking about Dustpelt. 08:36 Sat Jul 23

Updated 04:58, July 24, 2016 (UTC)

CBV? 21:55 Sat Jul 30

Crookedstar's Promise/Chapter 7 - Silver Nomination
Comments? 22:02, July 24, 2016 (UTC)
 * In the 3rd paragraph, 'Crookedkit' is a bit redundant.
 * In the 2nd-to-last paragraph, When she learns that he is a Clan cat, Mitzi queries as to why he has come here, as there have not been warriors there for a long time. Could you maybe say something like, 'warriors haven't came to the barn for a long time'? I was a bit confused when I read it the first time.
 * In the next sentence, Fleck explains that he has come alone, in search of the Moonstone, and assures the black she-cat that Crookedkit is not a danger to them. You don't have to if you disagree, but could you say 'the Clan cat' or 'the tabby' or something instead of 'he'? When I read the sentence at first I thought Fleck was talking about himself. But that might just be me, you don't have to change it if you disagree.
 * Maybe link 'cough' as Diseases_and_Injuries? 14:28 Thu Jul 28

Updated. 21:37, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 14 ~ Silver Nomination
Back at it :) -- 01:07, July 25, 2016 (UTC)


 * Is there a quote you can add?
 * Could you perhaps clarify the first and last sentences of paragraph three? They're a bit confusing at first read.
 * Could you fix some fragments in paragraphs 8, 10, and 11?

Fixed -- 18:06, July 25, 2016 (UTC)
 * In the 1st paragraph, "Fireheart protests and continues, saying they come from different Clans, and that Graystripe could never claim them as his own, and neither could Silverstream expose the fact of Graystripe being their father." Could you split this into 2 different sentences? Right now it's a bit too long and I think a run-on.
 * In the 2nd, "Fireheart connects this with Mistyfoot and Stonefur. He wonders how Oakheart explained it all to them," Oakheart didn't explain to Mistyfoot and Stonefur that he was their father and all. I'm a bit confused...
 * In this sentence, "Tigerclaw continues, saying that he noticed the two heading back from the RiverClan border, and made up a story that they had wanted to see how far the flood waters had stretched." Fireheart and Graystripe didn't make up the story that they checked the floodwaters, so why does it say they 'made up a story'?
 * In the 7th paragraph, there are some fragmants. Could you fix these?
 * Also, I think that Graystripe would be a 'major' character for the character list. Totally your call though :) Other than those, great job! 21:25 Thu Jul 28

Fixed It says in the book that Tigerclaw said that they had made it up, I think. --  22:45, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 15 ~ Silver Nomination
^..^
 * In the first paragraph, "Fireheart snarls that they'll put him right unless he wants his ear torn." I thought Longtail's ear was already torn? Is it supposed to be 'wants his other ear torn'?
 * In the 2nd-to-last, "The gray she-cat's eyes glow from the praise" It is clear that it is talking about Cinderpaw, but both she and Yellowfang are gray. Perhaps say 'the young she-cat', 'the gray apprentice', etc. instead?
 * In the last paragraph, "The white kit isn't there, but the ginger warrior finds the kit listening" 'Kit' sounds redundant. <span style="">14:39 Thu Jul 28

Updated

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 16 ~ Silver Nomination
IdK
 * For the main quote description where 'his patrol' are linked as Fireheart and Longtail, I don't think that's necessary, since the two are both linked later-on in the summary and normally quotes aren't linked like that I think.
 * In the 1st paragraph, "Fireheart gives himself a watch, and silently decides that he'll wake Graystripe...." Is 'Fireheart gives himself a watch' a typo? I think it might be 'gives himself a wash?
 * In the 2nd paragraph, "The massive tabby agrees that he can come on the patrol, and sets off to find another cat to complete the patrol. " 'patrol' sounds redundant. <span style="">14:54 Thu Jul 28

Updated kill teh typos

Hollyleaf's Story - Timeline
According to Hollyleaf's Story main page, it takes place between Long Shadows and Sunrise timeline wise. I don't think this is correct for two reasons. One: the story begins when the tunnel collapses onto Hollyleaf, not when she killed Ashfur. The tunnel collapse happens towards the end of Sunrise. Two: Hollyleaf's Story is a part of the Omen of the Stars arc. I think it makes more sense that it's closer to the arc than where it is now, at least after Sunrise.

Where it belongs exactly, I am not 100% sure. It does stretch along the first 5 books of Omen of the Stars, and it ends just over halfway through The Forgotten Warrior. We could give it an average placement of the time Hollyleaf spent in the tunnels (between Mistystar's Omen and Night Whispers) have it just after Sunrise or before/after The Forgotten Warrior. I think those are the best options to discuss about.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:38, July 26, 2016 (UTC)

I think that may have been my error. Technically, the main story itself starts after Sunrise, not Long Shadows. I made a mistake and everyone latched onto it, and I wasn't able to correct the error.

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 18 ~ Silver Nomination

 * In the 3rd paragraph, maybe link 'ShadowClan territory' as The_Lake_Territories or ShadowClan?
 * In the last paragraph, "Nightstar steps forward first, and calls the cats to listen and remember Brokenstar when Tallstar interrupts him." I think there should be a comma after Brokenstar, but I might be wrong.
 * I think Silverstream would be a minor character, not mentioned? Also, Darkstripe should be on the minor, Brokenstar should be mentioned, and I think Mousefur was first seen near the beginning of the chapter considering the summary, so I think her cite should be an earlier page. <span style="">15:07 Thu Jul 28

Updated Did everything but Silverstream is mentioned, since she's dead and there's no StarClan stuff so she can't be minor I think

Updated Wait, screw this. Was thinking of the wrong chapter

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 20 ~ Silver Nomination
Still a lot to do with Forest of Secrets subpages. Sigh. -- 20:59, July 26, 2016 (UTC)

Um, can you add character lists? There aren't any at all.

Um...this may sound annoying but I don't know how to do them...-- 21:11, July 26, 2016 (UTC)

This should explain how to do them, if you just use the same source code, add the characters and refs and blah. You may as well learn, as they are required.

Fixed -- 21:33, July 26, 2016 (UTC)

There's many cats missing from the character lists such as: Mistyfoot, Stonefur, Graypool, Sandstorm, Willowpelt, Runningwind, Whitestorm, Dustpelt, Brackenpaw, Nightstar, Stumpytail, Wetfoot, Onewhisker, Cinderfur, Deadfoot, Darkstripe, Mousefur, and Longtail. Can you add these?

Fixed -- 01:18, July 27, 2016 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but all your character list cites go from page 109-113, but the chapter is from pages 202-211. Wouldn't that mean the cites are all incorrect?

I'm using an online pdf of the book to write it in. I checked and 109-113 are the number of the pages...or the doc pages. Argh. -- 17:29, July 27, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't have the actual book atm only a pdf. I might be able to go to the library though...-- 00:41, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

Can you go through and cite the character lists to 'chapter 9' then? It's incorrect and misleading to leave them as they are. And,
 * Could you combine the first 4 sentences of paragraph 2 into just 2 sentences? They seem little choppy.
 * Also, could you change the last two sentences of the summary into something like "He wonders" or "He ponders if"? I'm pretty sure they shouldn't be questions.
 * Could you combine the first two sentences of the second-to-last paragraph?
 * "Yellowfang rasps that it wasn't easy; she'd been in many battles and knew. Bluestar comes into the den and Yellowfang turns to face her leader. She thanks her for protecting Brokentail at any cost. Bluestar shakes her head and says there is no need for 'thanks'; Brokentail deserves their compassion now. Yellowfang bows her head and softly apologizes for Brokentail bringing so much danger for her adopted Clan. " Can you cut down on the redundancy of these names by perhaps rephrasing them with "the leader" (for Bluestar) or "the medicine cat" perhaps for Yellowfang?
 * "He asks again where was he." I think this sentence is chopped in half. Could you fix this?
 * "A cat slams into Fireheart and knocks him to the ground. Fireheart struggles and notices it is the ShadowClan warrior, Stumpytail. He bites Fireheart's shoulder, and Fireheart, in return, batters Stumpytail's stomach. Stumpytail rears in agony and backs away. Fireheart stands up and notices that ThunderClan is outnumbered. " Can you cut down on the redundancy of Fireheart?
 * I'd also do a double-check for other instances of redundancy throughout the summary.

Like, using the character lists from fos chap 9? -- 18:35, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

Fixed except for citation(see above question) -- 18:40, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

Oh sorry, just cite them to the respective chapter. So yeah just put 'chapter 20' in place of the inaccurate page numbers

Fixed -- 20:30, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

The main quote appears to be a mixture of dialogue and narration. While I'm not complaining about that, I don't think the narration's really necessary, because it doesn't do that much for the quote imho, as you can tell it's Tigerclaw warning Fireheart and Graystripe from the description. If you think it's fine and you want to keep the mixed quote, I think the dialogue within the quote (Tigerclaw speaking) should be in single quotes (') rather than double quotes ("), though I could be wrong. You can ignore that whole section if you like, but in any case can you link "Fireheart", "Graystripe", and "Tigerclaw" in the main quote description rather than the summary below. 01:16, July 29, 2016 (UTC)

Fixed -- 01:57, July 29, 2016 (UTC)
 * I think that a quote about the battle itself might be more fitting, but that's your choice. If you don't change the quote, could you also get rid of the 'he spat' in the quote? So that it is, "Just be careful. I’ve got my eye on you—both of you."?
 * In the 1st paragraph, "springs in a tree as a bird startles him." I don't know, it might just be me, but I think it would be spring into a tree?
 * Maybe link 'battle' in the beginning of hte 3rd paragraph to Battles?
 * In the 4th, "helped Morningflower carry her kit" Maybe link Gorsepaw as 'her kit' or just link kit as kit, because if someone was reading it they might think the word 'kit' was linked to kit. Sorry if that was really confusing :P
 * In the 5th, if you wanted you could link 'life' (Bluestar is on her last life) to Leadership Ceremony. Your choice though.
 * Also, I think that everyone on the 'mentioned characters' list, except for Gorsepaw, should actually be in the minor characters list, since they all actually appreared. And Gorsepaw should be listed as Unnamed unless he actually is mentioned by name in the book. <span style="">08:05 Fri Jul 29

Fixed --  22:54, July 30, 2016 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 22 ~ Silver Nomination
In the "mentioned" section of the character list, a bit of the template is showing -- 21:14, July 26, 2016 (UTC)

Updated

In the minor character list, I think that Ashfur and Ferncloud should be listed? I think they were seen in the chapter right? If Brindleface's kits hadn't died by then, you should probably put them on the list too. <span style="">15:16 Thu Jul 28

Updated I think Brindleface's other kits were dead by then, since I remember she was grieving for them when Cloudkit went to ThunderClan and that's already happened

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 23 ~ Silver Nomination
1. In the last paragraph, "When they reach the camp, curious murmurings come from warriors around camp, but they seem to leave Graystripe alone." 'camp' is redundant. 2. In the Minor Chararacters List, wouldn't Mistyfoot and Stonefur be listed as their warrior names instead of Mistykit and Stonekit, since those were their names during the book? I'm not sure though, maybe it should be listed as Misykit and Stonekit so you don't have to do that. <span style="">15:27 Thu Jul 28

Updated Fixed 1, but the once part where they were mentioned was when Bluestar described them as kits so idk I might leave it

Ok that's fine, but the first time I forgot to mention: could you split the minor and mentioned character lists into 2 or 3 or something, since it's normally like that? <span style="">15:32 Thu Jul 28

Updated Yeah sure

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 25 ~ Silver Nomination

 * In the quote summary, maybe link 'territory' as ThunderClan's section for The Lake Territories or the Lake section for ThunderClan?
 * "She replies yes, and says that they yowl at night so her Twoleg gets up and shouts at them." Did you mean '...yowl so loud her Twoleg gets up..."? Or is the orignial how it is meant to be?
 * In the last paragraph, "Cloudpaw picks up his shrew, and pads quickly through the tunnel entrance as Fireheart drew himself up and waited as the RiverClan cats approached." In the italisized parts, are some words meant to be past-tense? Or is that a mistake? I wans't sure so I didn't fix it. <span style="">15:50 Thu Jul 28

Updated For bullet two, yeah in the book it just says that almost exactly, so that's original.

Sunrise/Chapter 21 ~ Silver Nomination
Wrote this back in like November and fixed it up
 * In the 2nd-to-last paragraph, "The medicine cat's eyes are wary as she tells her to continue, and the black she-cat realizes that she must know that she and her littermates, Lionblaze and Jayfeather, had found out the lie." For the 'she' who must know they found out the lie, I think that is Leafpool, but it is a bit confusing. Could you maybe change that 'she' to 'the medicine cat', 'the tabby', or something else?
 * In the same paragraph, The medicine cat surprises Hollyleaf with her response, saying she'll never tell any cat, asks why she did it, with a questioning tone. The 'she's are a bit confusing again with which she is Leafpool and which is Hollyleaf. <span style="">15:59 Thu Jul 28

Updated

Two more things:
 * 1. Just realizing but in "The medicine cat's eyes are wary as she tells her to continue, and the black she-cat realizes that the tabby must know that she and her littermates, Lionblaze and Jayfeather, had found out the lie." By 'must know' does it mean she probably knows, or she should be told? Could you specify?
 * Could you split the character lists again? <span style="">16:18 Thu Jul 28

Updated For 1, I tweaked it a bit but it said must know in the book so idk really

Join
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Forest of Secrets/Chapter 29 ~ Silver Nomination
There are a few spelling errors in paragraph 2 and 1 in the ending of paragraph 4. -- 00:38, July 28, 2016 (UTC)

Updated

In the 2nd-to-last paragraph, "moonhigh has come and gone without Bluestar naming a deputy." You could link 'naming a deputy' as Deputy Ceremony if you want. Also, I think Fireheart becoming deputy of ThunderClan is a major event that should be listed. <span style="">08:25 Fri Jul 29

Updated Instead of listing it as major event, I plopped his deputy ceremony into a 'Ceremonies' section if that's okay

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 19 ~ Silver Nomination


Could you cut down on the redundancy of 'Brackenpaw' in the second to last paragraph? And also, there's some fragments in paragraph three and Gathering isn't capitalized in the third to last paragraph.

Fixed -- 18:46, July 28, 2016 (UTC)
 * In the 3rd paragraph, "She asks Tallstar if he remembers that ThunderClan helped them when they were driven out and fought against RiverClan for them and questions if owe ThunderClan at all." I think it could be split into two (your choice), but is 'questions if owe ThunderClan at all.' a typo? I think it is supposed to be 'questions if they owe ThunderClan at all.'
 * In the character list, I think everyone but Swiftpaw would be 'minor' because they all appeared. However, could you add Reedwhisker, Perchkit, Pikepaw, and Primrosepaw (Unnamed) to the Mentioned list, because Mistyfoot mentioned her kits to Bluestar. <span style="">08:43 Fri Jul 29

Fixed --  14:59, July 29, 2016 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 21 ~ Silver Nomination
Such a sad chapter.. RIP

Wow Spooky you've fnished almost all of the FoS chapters! Great job!
 * Anyways, in the quote desciription, maybe link 'names him' as 'Warrior Ceremony'? You don't have to if you disagree though.
 * In the 1st paragraph, "As they exit the den, Fireheart notices that many cats are still in the clearing getting treatment for their wounds." Could you say 'the warrior den' or 'their den' or something? At first I thought it was Bluestar's den they were exiting so I was confused.
 * In the 2nd, "The Clan presses around the new warrior to congratulate him, and Fireheart sees Frostfur, Brackenfur's mother, pressing against him with pride. " 'press' sounds redundant.
 * In the same paragraph, "He bitterly thinks that her accident, and his almost near-drowning, were both Tigerclaw's fault. After the raid, Fireheart notices that Graystripe sticks around camp..." I think that should be a new paragraph between the two sentences? That's just my opinion though. <span style="">16:11 Thu Jul 28

Updated

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 30 ~ Silver Nomination

 * For the quote description and later on in the summary, since things are often not linked like that, could you instead just link kit as kit and removed the Feathertail and Stormfur links?
 * Could you link 'the territory' to The Lake Territories ThunderClan section or ThunderClan's Lake Territories section?
 * In the beginning of the 4th paragraph, 'Clan' sounds a bit redundant.
 * In this sentence, "The RiverClan deputy meows that they will be well cared for," can you specify who 'they' is? I know it is the kits, but since it had just mentioned 'they' for RiverClan, it could cause confusion.
 * In the 2nd-to-last paragraph, 'his friend' sounds redundant.
 * Also this is super minor but I think if there is a [character] (Unnamed) for the character list, there is a space between the character name and '(Unnamed)'. But that's really minor you don't have to change it. <span style="">14:02 Mon Aug 1

Updated Did everything, but I linked 'the territory' to The Forest Territories instead since I'm pretty sure that's what you meant

A Dangerous Path/Chapter 2 - Silver Nomination
19:41, July 31, 2016 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 24 ~ Silver Nomination

 * In the 1st, "He thinks that many of his Clan wouldn't agree of what he's doing" Shouldn't it be 'agree with what he's doing? Or was it suppoed to be like that?
 * At the beginning of the 3rd paragraph, it's kind of confusing with the sudden tranisition... Could you add a transition at the beginning to explain?
 * Toward the middle of the 3rd paragraph, 'he' sounds redundant.
 * For the characters list, could you say, instead of 'Brindleface's kits', link Ashfur and Ferncloud as unnamed? <span style="">14:12 Mon Aug 1

Updated Side note: when I put ash and fern in the characters list as unnamed, I put their warrior names... I checked their articles and they were never confirmed to be named 'Ashkit' and 'Fernkit' so I didn't know what else to put.

You could do what you did in Forest of Secrets/Chapter 22, where you said, "Brindleface's she-kit/Brindleface's tom-kit" <span style="">14:29 Mon Aug 1

Outcast/Chapter 9 ~ Silver Nomination
Wow it's been such a long time since I've written anything for PB. Comments? <span style="">13:26 Mon Aug 1

Outcast/Chapter 14 ~ Silver Nomination
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Outcast/Chapter 19 ~ Silver Nomination
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Outcast/Chapter 29 ~ Silver Nomination
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