Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 6

Milkfur (WC) (D) - Redone
I'm proud of this too. 18:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Give her the dark gray ear-tips, and blur the highlights and shading a tad, other than that, good job. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 18:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Define the shading around the haunch and legs, and maybe make the earpink a tad more triangular. 19:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Make him more of an off-white. 19:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Mossy was original artist. 19:13, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC) I had to fix the shading. Sorry. 19:37, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the earpink just a little. 20:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 00:31, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Blur the shading. 05:27, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 16:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Make him a little more cream. 17:07, July 8, 2011 (UTC) I really think the color's fine. 17:09, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded: I lightened the shading a bit. 17:24, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Can you add a highlight to the tail? It looks a bit 2D. The highlights on the body look wonderful! 17:46, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 17:52, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Could you make it a tad more cream colored? It looks like it's barely off-white as it is. 20:12, July 8, 2011 (UTC) I think the colour is fine, lighten the shading and blur it more, though. 20:51, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded: Is this good? 21:15, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Make the earpink more pale.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 01:15, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Also shape it a tad more into a triangle. 05:27, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 18:25, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the head highlight to match the other highlights. 01:43, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Blur the highlights a little more with the shading. 02:27, July 10, 2011 (UTC) The ear pink looks a little blotchy; smooth it out a bit :3 21:42, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Still working on this, to let you all know. 21:59, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Shouldn't this be approved since no-one has commented on it for four days? 04:19, July 16, 2011 (UTC) I don't know, she never said reuploaded, but if she did reupload it then it will be approved. 21:52, July 17, 2011 (UTC) Well, to be honest, I didn't add highlights, so I think it's fine. Sorry. 23:28, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Then...did you smoothen out the earpink? Other than that, it looks ready. 15:43, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. It may be just my computer, but it looks like there's barely any shading at all. :) Then smoothen the ear pink.  HA WK FI RE98  17:03, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think it's you computer. I was told to lighten the shading earlier. It's illogical to just darken it again. 17:18, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Fixed ear pink. 17:29, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. 01:00, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Bramble I believe. Then Night shine and Sandy did tweeks on it. I just lightened it then toned down the highlights. Took me about five minutes. :) 17:56, July 9, 2011 (UTC) The eyes look a little dark to me, but that might just be because of his pelt color.  19:23, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded: It was pretty dark. I lightened it.  21:18, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Ear pink looks too...hurr durr. R-R-R-R-R-Redden it and reshape it so it wouldnt be so smudged. --
 * Please use proper English. I cannot find hurr durr in my dictionary. And don't stutter, either. You might want to get that keyboard looked at. -_- 23:57, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:14, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Darken the earpink and blur the shading more. 01:22, July 10, 2011 (UTC) I think the earpink color looks fine, but straighten out the base of it a tad =) 03:47, July 10, 2011 (UTC) the highlights are a bit too light. Where's the light source?  06:08, July 10, 2011 (UTC) There is no light source. There doesn't need to be one, and all I did was lighten the fur and eyes and darken the highlights. I think the shading's fine considering it got approved. I will fix the earpink and darken the highlights.  00:33, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Blur the highlights and shading a lot.  00:43, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Okay, then darken the highlights.  08:06, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded: Eww...  15:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Maybe you should make the highlights bigger. Then it would be easier to blur and darken.  15:59, July 11, 2011 (UTC) When I darkened/blurred them, they became smaller. I think they were better before.  16:57, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Thats why I said they should be bigger... I guess its fine. :D 02:08, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Change the strength of the brush and then try blurring. I think the highlights should be blurred. They seem out of place. 19:58, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! :D But you should make his pelt a little darker. He's more of a gray-black. I've imagined him a bit darker than this. ;)  HA WK FI RE98  17:01, July 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * This already borders black. If I darken it anymore, it will look like a black cat. 17:20, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. 01:00, July 22, 2011 (UTC)