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Smokepaw (NP) (star) - Declined


Falcon, you need to put a reservation on the chart for this. I saw you crossed it out on the list but it needs to be on the chart with a date and column.

Ok, fixed it. Falcon 49 (talk) 19:15, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

There's major shading leaking on the left side of your image, can you clean that up?

Define shading, smudge ear pink, and add the nose pink as well as eye depth. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 19:52, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

damnation. there is still a bit of shading leaking. :/ Falcon 49 (talk) 20:40, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. are eye depht and nose pink ok now? :/ Falcon 49 (talk) 05:41, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

erm... comments? 13:32, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Please don't ask for comments right away. It says at the top of the page that you must wait three days before asking. It hasn't even been ten hours since you've uploaded. As for comments themselves, darken the shading, and use the ear pink color from the apprentice; this is far too neon pink.

ok sorry. I'm a bit too impatient. Falcon 49 (talk) 13:53, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Agreeing with Skye, the ear pink and nose pink are too bright. Most ear pinks tend to blend with the pelt, but that's just how I do it most of the time — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:18, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. is the ear pink better now?

you still need to fix the nose. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:26, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading, please. 14:59, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

There's still a lot of shading leaking outside the tail <- that way

I know. I tried to fix it, but I'm not able to. Falcon 49 (talk) 18:17, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. better now? Falcon 49 (talk) 18:32, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Most of the shading is still leaking, just take the erase tool of whatever program you use and swipe most of it away ^

I know, but it isn't that easy! I risk to erase part of the drawing, too. Falcon 49 (talk) 19:06, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Put the lineart, base, and shading all on separate layers. Then you can only edit the shading layer, and not erase any lineart or base. If you put an erase tool on size 1 with the amount of shading you need to erase, I highly doubt you'll erase any part of your image that you didn't intend to

Reuploaded. still some shading leaking?

It's much better, but there's still some on the very left of the picture

Reuploaded. I think I fixed it. Is the rest ok? Falcon 49 (talk) 19:56, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

define shading depth and define the shading on the head and tail. There is waste every were around the image. 23:52, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

what do you mean by waste? Falcon 49 (talk) 14:03, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

stuff outside the linear that shouldnt be there. 16:56, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. what about now? Falcon 49 (talk) 17:50, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body and tail shading a bit more. 23:33 Sat Apr 23

Reuploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 08:29, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body and tail shading a little more, and blur/smudge the earpink a bit. Also, I think there might still be a little waste around the tail. 01:56, April 26, 2016 (UTC)

I think there's a white pixel on the left paw, could you fill that in?

Reuploaded.--Falcon 49 (talk) 15:58, April 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's still a tad of shading waste in the tail loop,I believe

Define the light on the legs, and blur/smudge the earpink a tad more. 00:41, April 29, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste everywere, not just on the tail :3 23:02, April 29, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I don't see it. I'll try erasing all around the image.--Falcon 49 (talk) 17:57, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Falcon 49 (talk) 18:07, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

There's actually still waste off to the left, and it's also (I think) forming a faint haze in the tail loop. Also, define the light source?

Smudge ear pink? 20:52 Sat Apr 30

The light on the legs could still be defined more. 20:35, May 2, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Falcon 49 (talk) 19:37, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

There's still a few pixels of waste off to the left

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Still working?

I'm sorry, but as per the guidelines, since this has gone a week without uploads, I have to decline this.

I'll take over :)

Archiving.