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Unknown Residents Blanks ~ For Approval
These were fun! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:48, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

I'll fix the other image on my next upload and thicken the lineart. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:52, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

On the shorthaired blank, perhaps just round off the tail tip? or make the fur tips on the tailtip pointier, it doesn't look quite right the way it is.

Maybe make the -> front paw a little more pronounced? Not exactly sure on how it would look but I think it should be sticking out a little more at that angle. I'm assuming that it looks the same on the shorthaired blank so fix it on both blanks. 03:37, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Am I the only one who just sees a gray box when it comes to the short-furred blank?

You're not, but i commented saying I'll fix it on my next upload. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:45, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

For the head, can you lengthen the bottom a bit and make more of a mouth, and then the chin? 07:51, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

It's actually the muzzle itself. I just had the cat look down, so the chin, I don't think, is there. It's the top of the muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:55, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart

I think the right (our right) front leg is thinner than the left one. Even them out? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:48, January 11, 2018 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I'll fix the thickened lineart later and add fur to the elbow. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:51, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

is it possible to maybe make the longhair tails a bit fluffier since theyre supposed to be longhaired after all 07:31, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe lengthen the extended paw?

What do you mean lengthen? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 17:44, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Make the leg longer; right now it kind of looks disproportionate. (but that could be just me)

Is the front leg on our right suppose to be bent or straight? I'm thinking bent. If so cats tend to stick their elbows up almost into their ribcage like this. So a cat crouching like that would have the elbow inside the lines that make the body. This would also help with how the leg looks a little shorter than the rest. 16:35 Tue Jan 16 2018 16:35, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make the back on the long-haired blank more fluffy? 21:06, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Crop the shorthair blank to the lineart (I think the longhair already is) Also there's a line on <- front leg near the head that I don't think is supposed to be there

The right (our right) front leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

I haven't forgotten about this! I shall tweak them on my next upload later! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:14, January 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:32, January 22, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the -> back leg on the short-haired blank more bent than the long-haired blank's? If that's the case, could you make the long-haired blank's leg more like the short-haired blank? 20:43, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

They're the same thing, it's just fluffy on the long-haired blank. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:03, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the line I commented about earlier is still there, so I'll circle it, as well as a few other lines. I can see that the lines are all in the whisker area, but they don't seem to connect anywhere on the head, which is why I think they're out of place, and they aren't on the shorthair, but they don't look like fluff. And finally, the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

the front of the hind leg also looks a little thin around the lineart, as does the all paws. 05:03, January 27, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo had said they were out of town, and experiencing some family issues. I don't think they've returned yet, but even if the Still Working goes by 24 hours, it shouldn't be declined, because it wouldn't be fair to Cosmo if she's not here to work on it. <span style="">02:29, 2/03/2018

Blanks are exempt from the one week/one month ruling. These won't be delcined, and Cosmo came to me and let me know about her activity. These will stay up.

I am home from out of town, but still family issues are going on and now my computer in sai isn't letting me save any files for some reason, even though I shut it down and stuff. I'm still trying to get back on and tweak these blanks, but I'm sorry for the inactivity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

It's all good, Cosmo. Thanks for updating us!

I should be uploading in the next day or two! Hopefully by saturday or tomorrow night. Sorry about not uploading in a while. Also, i got a new tablet for desktop, so that's good. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:44, February 9, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps thicken the lines on the ears and back a little bit? It might just be my eyes, but it seems a bit thin. <span style="">18:03 Sun Feb 11

Re-uploaded. WOO! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:42, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the lines around -> whiskers/leg look kind of messy on the shorthair, and a little messy on <- whiskers/fluff on longhair. The longhair's tail is at a different angle than the shorthair's, and my only other concern is that the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

Could you make the ears just a little more pointed? 20:58, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

idiot me above said the wrong leg: right (our right) back leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

The left front leg looks too thin. Even with the angle difference, the front legs should still carry the same weight, if that makes sense. I can give a red line if it would make what I mean clearer. <span style="">12:40 Thu Mar 1

maybe make the fluffy bits on the side of the face of the longhaired a bit smaller, like right now they seem a lil big if u know what I mean? not reducing it, though. 18:42, March 1, 2018 (UTC)

Are you still working Cosmo? Not going to decline this, just checking on ya.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:57, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, I am. Things been shitty lately. But they should be uploaded again soon... <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:41, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:49, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

I'm gonna change the hind leg again! :u Any redlines will help too. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:45, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

I think you should make the line on the <= ear disconnect from the outline, so it doesn't look too thin, if you know what I mean. Just a bit similar to the other ear. And maybe alter the middle tuft on the long-haired tailtip a little? It could be just me, but it looks almost like another paw. I love this blank so much ughhh ><!!

These are turning out very nice! Maybe make the lineart on bottoms of the left front paw and back paws a tiny bit thicker? 22:31, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Harepaw (VS) (App) - CBA
Easy peasy. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:48, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think there's some white pixels inside of the <--- earpink. <span style="">07:01, 3/21/2018

It's meant to be like that. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 07:52, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define a shading just a little on the ---> front leg? Pretty! 12:26, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

This is beautiful! I love white cats with reddish shading <3 Define the shading depth a little on the face? 16:27, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading slightly on the haunch?

Re-uploaded. I love albinos tbh. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:09, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Dapplepaw (VS) (A) - For Approval
wee.

Define the shading? Bootiful! Also, I think the ear pink is leaking in <-- ear.<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 06:02, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

It's not leaking; I just don't have it filled in all the way; it's just a preference of mine. I'll define the shading later. ^^

Re-uploaded.

Could you maybe define the shading on all of the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:12, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded. so, I reuploaded earlier but apparently my edit didn't publish.

Softpaw (VS) (Ki) ~ For Approval
hey. im back. she's a little plain but im happy --

Pretty! Darken the shading and add some on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 06:57, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a little. Cute! <span style="">07:00, 3/21/2018

Aaaaaaand re-uploaded! --

Smooth out the shading and define it on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 07:54, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That took me about 5 minutes of really intense blurring but I think I did it???

haha oops forgot my signature --

Could you perhaps define the light on the top half of the tail? Also, with the light source that it seems like you're aiming for, I'm not sure there should be any shading crossing all the way across the front legs; it'd just shade the legs on the > side if you know what I mean

Maybe smooth out the shading around the chest a little? 14:33, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, maybe a bit in <-- ear too? 22:26, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Patch, I don't have any shading for the <- ear because of my light source. Do you mean the -> ear? --

I've seen shading in the ear with this source before, I do it sometimes with my images too, but it's not needed. Up to you if you want to add it. Define the shading depth on both the legs and back paw. 13:08, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart. <span style="">16:36, 3/22/2018

Expand the shading on the tail and define it on the legs more? c: <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'll get rid of all the excess shading on the -> paw next upload, okay? --

Add some light on the > front leg, and maybe make the tail shading stretch further down to the base, if you know what I mean

Re-uploaded. No I'm fairly sure I didn't know what you meant but I tried. --

Dapplepaw (VS) (K) ~ CBA
back at it. <span style="">07:09, 3/21/2018

I think the back foot is meant to be gray, if you're basing this off the apprentice. --

Re-uploaded. <span style="">07:36, 3/21/2018

Smooth out the shading some? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 07:53, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">08:08, 3/21/2018

I don't think there should be any white below the <--- eye. 12:24, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

I almost feel like the tail white could be receded a little, in proportion to how much white shows on the apprentice's tail tip

Re-uploaded. <span style="">20:54, 3/21/2018

I think the white on --> hind leg should be extended. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:54, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

What do you mean, extended? I'm pretty sure the leg wouldn't be visible at this angle. <span style="">21:58, 3/21/2018

Like expand the white a bit more I think? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:59, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Can you get a redline please? I'm very confused. <span style="">22:05, 3/21/2018

With how I have it on the apprentice, I'm not sure the white would be visible. I think it matches as-is.

CBA? 01:27, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (VS) (Ki) ~ For Approval
I haven't done this in so long... ;-; 11:58, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the flank a bit? 12:23, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reups  12:39, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the muzzle a bit? The shading looks a little blotchy on the flank, so smooth it out some more? Maybe turn down the purple in the shading a little too, it looks very neon to me. Last ones your choice, so you can ignore it if you want. 13:16, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reups  18:25, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest and define it a little bit by the neck. 22:24, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading, and then add a little depth to the shading.

Maybe smooth out the shading on the > back paw a little

Reups I just redid the shading lmao 20:19, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail a little? 21:40, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reups  12:33, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

I think you could lower the opacity of the shading a bit. looks great so far :)

Reups Thx Fox! 14:48, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

Softpaw (VS) (A) ~ CBA
HELLO

Define the shading depth on both hindlegs and inside --> ear? 16:25, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Define it on the front leg a little? Maybe make the overall shading just a bit deeper too, it's looking good! 23:10, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 8D

Define the shading depth on the chest and stomach? 00:34, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I defined it slightly, but the shading starts to look kinda blotchy/uneven when it's done too much.. I'm guessing it's just the source, because most of the apps with this light source have little depth on the chest and stomach comparatively to others

Could you smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us? 20:03, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? 01:24, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (VS) (App) - For Approval
Aaaaaaa. So this is my first time in a long time making a charart. Sorry for messing anything up, please tell me if I did. I hope I didn’t miss any of the steps of making it or uploading it. Sorry if this sucks too, I’m inexperienced. 01:29, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten his pelt a little to match the kit more? It seems a bit darker in comparison. Smooth the shading near the back on the hind leg closest to us and define the overall shading depth. 02:27, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading a bit. Also, this looks wonderful. ^^

It might be just me, but does the texture on the kit look a bit different from this one? Try to match that one. I don't know if texture has to match per se, but I'm fairly sure it does correct me if I'm wrong. --

Dunno if it's just me, but he looks gray and white.

The gray and white and the darker pelt colour comes from the texture. I’ll change it soon. :) 01:24, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

I also think the ears are a little lighter on the kit. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 14:12, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Ears look matched to me imo....this looks awesome, Winter! : D

Reuploaded. 01:24, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and chest? This is lovely! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:15, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps make the shading that goes across the haunch stretch upwards to the back lineart a tad, as it seems like it's leaking away from the lineart atm

Maybe lighten the shading a little on the hind leg closet to us. It looks kind of dark compared to the rest of the shading. 01:25, March 24, 2018 (UTC)