Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Coal (Ro) ~ Redone
Yay! My first tweaked charart! Just to tell you, I use highlights and right now they're blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

OA and why did it have to be redone? 23:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the whole thing, I can't see the lineart 23:53, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the redo list and OA is Blackclaw09. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:58, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink. 00:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

His ears are facing <---that way though. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:39, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but they should still be centered. That's the placement. 00:47, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

But, the earpink placement for Shadepelt's elder would have to be centered, then. I think it's fine. 00:49, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If is ear-pink facing ←← this way, i think you should add it on the second ear too. ,18:25,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   2012! The end of the world?  14:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pelt more, and maybe enlarge the highlights 06:36, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  21:45, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights a tad. 01:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  12:51, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur or tone the highlights down more. 22:24 Sat Jan 14

Reuploaded I don't know if the changes are showing.... ♫Purplemoon♪   2012! The end of the world?  01:33, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the "highlights" and blur them. Also, the one on the tail doesn't make much sense with the current light source, so remove it. 01:54 Mon Jan 16

Also lighten the shading a tad. 18:23, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   2012! The end of the world?  21:51, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink-- 01:36, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be centered. We went through this above. (^^) 01:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add a 'highlight' at the bottom of the tail? Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:37, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Milkfur (WC) (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be done as shorthaired. OA was Moonflight, comments? 08:27, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some haunch shading, and blur alot. Sky-  Lather. Rinse. Obey. 09:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that light parts alot ,18:20,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it. 20:07 Thu Jan 5

It looks like there is blurred lineart on the haunch. 20:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You know you didn't actually have to redo it? You can just layer the shorthaired lineart over the original version. See the tutorial if you don't know how. 22:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and there's some missing lineart on the front paw and a few other places. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad more. 03:44, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Dapple? 22:23, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:07, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

(If this isn't a highlight, just ignore what I say ;)) Tone down the highlight on the tip of the tail. It looks really bright. O.o 23:12, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made it a bit darker. 23:33, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make him a slightly creamier colour? Sky-  Lather. Rinse. Obey. 23:46, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

The color is from the old image. 01:10, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

It does look a bit too white, and it's his only image anyway. It wouldn't hurt to make it a bit more creamy color. 01:26, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Blur the earpink more. 23:13 Wed Jan 11

The base pelt color seems okay...The long haired version was the same. =P 01:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 18:09, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink also. 19:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 01:56 Mon Jan 16

If she isn't (I'm assuming 7 days with these right?) then I'll take over. 17:51, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Dapplecloud, I'm taking over. It's been 7 days. 18:30, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made him slightly more cream colored, hope ya don't mind  18:53, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and on the closest hind foot, it looks like the shading stops abruptly. And maybe add a bit more haunch shadin. ^^ Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  20:48, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Songbird (Q) ~ Redone
Redone because it was blotchy, tinted green, and the tabby pattern was unrealistic. OA=Icestorm123, later redone by Dappleclaw, then tweaked a bit by Dappleclaw and Nightshine. (I think) 16:55, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the unshaded parts a bit. (Might just be me though) Sky- Lather. Rinse. Obey. 21:17, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

... okay. Smudge the stripes to be less solid. 22:49, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudges the white some more. Define the shading 23:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the brown up too, seeing as she's a light brown tabby. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:43, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

And if you want the tabby pattern to be realistic as you said, ditch the triangles. 02:46, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ah, idiot me. :P But, I have to withdraw this due to a very busy week. 01:06, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 01:07, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I Re-Uploaded.' I completely redid it... comments? 01:42, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Connect some of the stripes along the body. It doesn't make much sense for stripes to radiate from the spine and stomach and never meet. 01:52, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 06:35, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it. <span style="">22:28 Sat Jan 14

Re-Uploaded. 23:06, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) ~ Redone
The shagding was poor and the ear-pink was to dark for a white cat. The OA was either Cloudy or Icecloud. I got permission to redo this from Ivy in chat a couple minutes ago by the way. Comments for improvement? 19:41, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and thicken out the shading on the haunch. Define the ear-pink and blur it. <span style="">23:10 Wed Jan 11

I'm not a fan of the earpink. Make it darker and redder. Breeze whisker  01:17, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:22, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I forgot some waste between the legs. Fixed that. 19:33, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:55, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the tail 'highlight' curve with the tail more, and if she has shading on the back of her head and ears area, darken it to match the rest of the shading. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  05:37, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:48, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

To me the shading looks kind of dark and unblurred. Do that as well as blur the earpink a little more. 18:49, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <span style="">22:33 Sat Jan 14

Re-uploaded. Fail. 00:03, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  04:37, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little, too. x3 05:20, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Still a fail with blurring the shading. 22:18, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lolol blur and lighten it more c: 22:23, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. 05:16, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Than blur it more. <span style="">18:10 Mon Jan 16

Make her an off-white. The color she is is white, and it shouldn't be. 19:30, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

It's not, and i'm withdrawing this. It is starting to get on my nerve, the shading. 19:35, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 21:44, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:55, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Based on the shading, I think the unshaded part of the tail should be on the other side of the tail. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:59, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

The light was coming slightly from the top-right, so I won't change it, unless someone else says otherwise. 18:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading or the entire image, it looks pale gray. -- Elo legs 19:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Then perhaps extend the light part to cover more of the tail? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:30, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) ~ Redone
Eh. Comments? 02:10, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job! The tail shading looks a a little flat though. 18:40, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Shelly, but where is your light source? I can't see one right now... <span style="">02:04 Mon Jan 16

Above. 02:49, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, then add a small line of shading to the crease where the haunch meets the belly, add a highlight to the tail, and darken the shading on the bottom of the belly, the chest, and the neck. <span style="">02:53 Mon Jan 16

Should there be earpink on both ears? 15:29, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

If I interpret the ears as both facing the viewer, yeah. I'll reupload later today. 15:36, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:19, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks flat to me, but it's hard to explain how you should fix it... 00:49, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC) (Ki) - Tweaked
She needed darker shadings, i also edited eye and just a little earpink. OA is Darkhallows and redone by Icethroat21 later. ,20:27,January 13,2012 (UTC)

This is awesome >:D The left ear looks lighter than the left ear. Darken it. 21:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,11:52,January 14,2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. <span style="">02:05 Mon Jan 16

Reuploaded ,15:13,January 16,2012 (UTC)

There's a little bit of blurred lineart in her left ear. 00:19, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

eh..yes reuploaded ,15:40,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her <-- leg. 18:14, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, reuploaded ,20:43,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Lighten this ---> sides shading on the hind. <span style="">01:33 Wed Jan 18

Reuploaded ,19:52,January 18,2012 (UTC)

Foxwhisker (W)~ Tweaked


The stripes had been bothering me for a while, and im the OA of the current image so it was easy to tweak. I also blurred the shading a bit. 21:32, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

O I love this! Blur the stripes. 21:35, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 02:46, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little bit more. I luff this<3 05:37, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be more blue-grey. OA= Mumble785 with tweaks by Minstarr and Snowdazzle. 23:17, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

The tear should be on the other ear, me thinks. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 23:26, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I copied it from the past image. Let me check. 23:27, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Well it's in the other ear on her leader image now. Could you make the color a bit lighter to match that one? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:13, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Take the color from the haunch of Stormtail 00:24, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 13:52, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Upoaded. 00:05, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten and redden the ear-pink and define and darken the shading. 04:08, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? 17:29, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 20:00, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the haunch shading. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 20:16, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. 21:49, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

The tear in the ear should go more in a sideways direction, and the colour or shading or whatever looks darker than the leader one. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 22:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Ear fail Dx 18:50, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's miscolored lineart on the eyes. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  16:12, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Try to make parts of the torn ear thinner than the others, if it's like that on the leader image. Also, enlarge and blur the earpink. 18:16, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.' Torn ears hate me. 23:05, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

The tail shading looks a bit flat. 00:12, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and define it. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:22, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Than blur it into the pelt more. <span style="">01:35 Wed Jan 18

Re-Uploaded. 01:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 18:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:35, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wing (PH) - Redone
Okay... I have been simply dying to redo this. The gray was placed awkwardly so it looked like really weird shading. If anyone has any real vices with me redoing this, I can take it down and revert it. OA was Shadowedheart, with a tweak by Bramble, and then a redo by Moonflight and Cloudy. Comments? 05:43, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the grey a little. 16:13, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Explain to me what was wrong with this image. I do have a problem with you re-doing it. It needed to match her queen image, which it did. I have a major issue with this, because it was one of the quickest I'd ever completed, and I thought it was perfect. 20:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)


 * If you have problems with images that get proposed and accepted for tweak, take it up with the project leadership and spearhead a revamp of the process by which tweaks are proposed and given permission. Don't attack those redoing images. Instead find out why it was approved and discuss it with the person who approved the tweak. 22:07, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno... please, please don't get mad at me, but the placement of the grey on all of her images is a bit awkward. I can't tell is the grey on the bottom is shading or not just by looking. 21:56, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Now, Scarlet, could you please lighten the shading a bit? 21:59, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Why does the pattern have to be changed though? I have no problem with this being redone just fr say, better shading, or defining the patches, but personally I liked the old pattern. Can't you keep that and just define the patches or something? I don't wanna cause drama, I just liked the old patter. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  02:28, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. Cloudy would have given you the .xcf to touch it up. 02:35, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If everyone would like to keep the old version, I'm perfectly fine with that. I just say that Gorsetail's pattern had been redone and I figured that cats with the same pattern should be redone. And if Cloudy would like to tweak it, I'm fine with that to (she asked earlier). 04:07, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

But the pattern's not the same thing. Just look at the queen image. It only looks that way because the PH blanks are a little smaller and harder to work with. If you don't mind, I'll take over on it, as I do in fact have the .xcf file, and I'm working on it now. It's looking better, actually. 04:14, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Fine by me. 04:15, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tweaked the patches, lowered the opacity on the mud, and tweaked the eye, 'cause I thought the color was too plain. 16:43, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you remove the brown paws though? I never really understood why she had them. She's not mentioned with them as far as I know, and they have mud splotches, not mud covering their legs. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  20:45, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. And make the mud more splotchy so she looks like a gray and white cat with mud, not a gray and brown cat :P <span style="">02:09 Mon Jan 16

Personally, I think the streaks are fine. I can look at this image and clearly tell it's a gray and white cat. 20:28, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

At least burn the mud, then. It's too light. <span style="">03:39 Wed Jan 18

Not all mud is the same shade of brown, it looks fine. -- Elo legs   19:42, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you, Elo. Also, each artist has their own style, and honestly, I don't like copying other user's styles. 20:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) ~ Tweaked
He was on the tweak list 'cause he need his shading darkened. OA I believe was Sunspirit. Comments for improvement? 18:28, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I love this <3 Blur the scar. 18:30, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Aww, I know this isnt on the list but could you blur gray into white? Now it look like white cat with hairy carpet ,18:48,January 14,2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks guys. Well, comments? 18:51, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:36, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 02:44, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. 18:06, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:33, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Splash (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Patches needed to be smudged, OA was Icethroat. 05:12, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the tail spots a bit more and maybe change the direction of the smudings to go with the fur; it kinda looks like his fur's growing up. xP 06:09, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like that Scarlet? 06:16, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Better. Can you make the front part of his belly patch smudge back towards his tail so that they go with the way his fur'd grow? Kinda like Yellowfang's old MC shading style. 06:21, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the highlights. 18:17, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) - Tweaked
Was on the list for ear-pink and stripes, but I think the stripes look fine as they are, so I just smudged them a bit. OA was Icy. Comments? 06:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

(still doesn't like the stripes) Eh... define the earpink? 23:56, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:55, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

(I don't like the stripes either) dull the earpink a bit. <span style="">02:13 Tue Jan 17

Re-uploaded 03:08, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more (pretty please will you change the stripes?) <span style="">03:37 Wed Jan 18

Seriously, Scarlet. The stripes are bad. >.> And he only has one image, so it's not like redoing them would open upa bunch of images that would need to be redone to match. 14:24, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, Shelly's correct. If you want to re-do them, re-do them. Personally, I think y-tabbies look a little odd. 20:34, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur (E) ~ Tweaked
OA was Willowpool16. Fixed shading and earpink and blurred lineart. No highlights. Comments? 17:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading. 18:05, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 00:11, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I'm not liking the shading. 01:49, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken teh shading some more :3 <span style="">02:11 Mon Jan 16

Define the neck shading if there is any. <span style="">01:39 Wed Jan 18

Brackenfur (W) - Redone
Hey guys, not sure if changes are showing, but either way, wee.. Here it is. xD I can darken it to match the apprentice image. But I used the ref link on the tweak page, so yeah. xD Comments? 17:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tis belongs on the tweak page, mon ami 8D 18:00, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Moved it. xD 18:01, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

There ya go xD Blut the scar. 18:04, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just a personal preference, but could you extend one of the cheek stripes to extend behind his head? It seems a bit off, just stopping so sharply. 18:07, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:13, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot to add the OA and why it was redone. :3 17:33, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Does this count as a triangle tabby? I think it looks realistic, but it looks kinda triangle-y, and we're redoing it for that reason, so.... <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  15:21, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks like you're wanting to do a wavy tabby, so here you go. 16:52, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

This style is at least better than the old one. And the cat you're citing is actually a mackeral tabby, Ivy. Anyway, the scar stands out a bit too much. Blur it? 01:04, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. <span style="">01:27, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

Gorsetail (P3) (Q) ~ Redone
OA=Moonleaf and it needs to match the warrior that I just redid. Colors taken from warrior xcf file. Comments? 19:03, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

This is so puurdy! *steals* Blur the belly shading a tad. 19:04, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Purty! Define the tail shading just a tad. *steals* 19:05, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

And also blur the neck shading. 00:09, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:49, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (E) - Redone
Original artist was Bramble, needed stripes and shading tweaked. Comments? Elorisa  02:03, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

It looks kinda more ginger then the warrior one...or should the warrior be tweaked to be less green and to match this one? 02:09, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'll tweak the warrior image to match if this comes to a conflict; people get comments all the time on their images to be less green anyway xD. I think the warrior image should be tweaked, personally. Elorisa  02:10, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make the ear-pink paler. 17:07, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Duskfur (Q) - For approval
She was on the redo list for unrealistic stripes, to look brown, and to get rid of the green tint. OA was Flamingomom3. First Photoshop image. Comments? 02:58, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Blur the stripes a bit. <span style="">15:01 Mon Jan 16

Actually, can you define the stripes and shading altogether? 17:47, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks flat. Add more depth to it. <span style="">13:59 Tue Jan 17

It's finished, though, when I try to reupload it, it says that the extension is the wrong MIME type. Yes, the file is .png 19:34, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

* sigh* Due to the technical difficulties mentioned above, this is withdrawn. 21:36, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 22:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Ki) - Redone
First tweak/redo! OA = Mistyheart, Oblivion and Goldenpaw. (I think .-.) Redone to match other images. <span style="">14:19 Mon Jan 16

Nice :-), Lighten the image a bit and blur the shadings 15:16,January 16,2012 (UTC)

Lovely Sweet! Define the earpink. 15:26, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not lightening the image becaus eI got the colours off the apprentice xcf. The shadin gis blurred to the max now, and the ear pink is a different colour 'cause you can't see the earpink using the apprentices' image colour. *exhales* <span style="">16:26 Mon Jan 16

There's waste all around the charart. 16:31, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stupid waste. <span style="">16:43 Mon Jan 16

Blur the shading. 18:12, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore, sorry. <span style="">18:25 Mon Jan 16

Lighten the shading then, if you cant lighten whole pic. 18:30,January 16,2012 (UTC)

I would but I colour picked off the apprentice image, so I don't think I should lighten it. <span style="">20:45 Mon Jan 16

Everything cant be matched perfectly. I think you should try blur shadings more..maybe way smugle→blur? 15:59,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. And yes, I agree, you should try a couple different ways to blur the shading, cause it really does need to be blurred. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  16:19, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">01:47 Wed Jan 18

Hawkfrost (D) - Redone
<3. OA was Maplefern, with redos by Nightshine and Paleclaw. He needed to match his warrior, comments? 21:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * Jaw drops in amazement* Wow. O.O Anyways, :P there's a gray pixil by the tail which I think is supposed to be tail lineart. <span style="">21:24 Mon Jan 16

Re-uploaded. Thanks c: 21:32, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the pink scar lines on the lines of his muzzle  22:01, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Whoops ^^; 02:35, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Epicness. Blur the white some more a bit. <span style="">02:03, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

It's the exact same as his warrior. I layered the deputy lineart over. I'm not changing it. 02:11, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes a bit? They seem lighter than the rest. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  04:42, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cloud With Storm in Belly (Alt. E) - Tweaked
Needed to be darker. OA was SquirrelFlame. <span style="">08:40, Tue, Jan, 17, 2012

Make it a bit more darker. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  08:44, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  <span style="">09:19, Tue, Jan, 17, 2012

Make it even darker, blur the shading, and make the earpink waaaaaaay less hot pink. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:18, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pssh, hot pink ish sexy. XD I think there's neck shading, so define it. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  19:01, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye highlight. 21:57, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  1 word: Disgusting. I shall fix the missing color parts around the lineart in my next upload. The anchor tool and fuzzy selecting blur do not go well together... <span style="">01:59, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

Darken the mid-drift shading, and you might wanna redo the earpink. I think the tweaking has made the fur underneath all tinted pink around there. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:05, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading :3 <span style="">22:23 Wed Jan 18

Frostfur (Ki) - Tweaked
I'm back for more! 8D Needed earpink less neon and nose less neon. OA = Echopaw and Birdpaw. Comments? <span style="">13:58 Tue Jan 17

She is so cuuuteee *steals*, blur the shadings a tad please (I know its not on the list but..) 15:56,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad and desaturate the nose. 18:20, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I touched the shading a bit, I don't really wanna mess it up. Because if I fiddle with it I will... <span style="">01:18 Wed Jan 18

Blur the earpink a tiny bit. 01:19, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded Dere you go! <span style="">01:30 Wed Jan 18

Blur the shading a bit on her right (our left) side of the body. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  22:01, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Y'all enjoy! <span style="">22:24 Wed Jan 18

Blossomfall (Alt.Ki) - Tweaked
Attack! Last spot! Ok, I redoned shadings and hightlinks, it looks quite darker now o.O OA is Icethroat21 ,16:21,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Give her a brown nose, she looks like she has a grey nose, and desaturate the earpink a tad. 18:19, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the face 'highlight' a bit duller. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 19:12, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and well, I dont know what "desaturate" means. ,20:48,January 17,2012 (UTC)

It means to make the colour duller. 21:42, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Moon, reuploaded ,19:55,January 18,2012 (UTC)

Featherwing (W) - Tweaked
New way of texturing shading! 8D Shading needed tweaking. OA was Icethroat. Comments? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  04:35, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks better already. ^^ Blur the shading some more. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  04:37, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (W) -Redone
changes aren't showing. I shouldn't have promised to do these all... X.X Oh well. A promise is a promise. I'm considering redoing these stripes cause they look horrible. OA was Crows. Comments? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  04:39, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) - Redone
Redone to match the apprentice and because the stripes were horrible XD comments? <span style="">06:12 Wed Jan 18

Beautiful! Lighten the earpink please, i cant see it. , 14:53,January 18,2012 (UTC)

This might be a stupid question to you, but do you mind lightening the stripes abit? It says be's both pale and light...so, yeah. 17:30, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

And maybe make the earpink more visible. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)