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Oatwhisker (WC) (Star) - For Approval
Why the hell isn't the image showing up..? Well this was fun to do. 16:10 Sun Jul 2

Here he is. Since the image isn't showing up. 16:15 Sun Jul 2

Wikia's being a butt with images. Also, is it just me, or do his images look... more yellow than creamy brown?

I noticed that while I was working on it. There's a highlight, but the colors are more like a pale ginger. Want me to put the elder up for a tweak and adjust the colors? 16:21 Sun Jul 2

If you wouldn't mind, I would greatly appreciate it. It wouldn't be fair to you if all of your comments on this image are about the coloring when all you're doing is trying to match another image. =P

Changes Here Let me know if I need to wait for the elder to be tweaked first and I'll revert the colors back. 16:46 Sun Jul 2

Yeah, you'll have to wait, especially because there's a chance that it couldn't pass, and I think since Berry would be tweaking it, you should let her decide on the colors.

Since the tweak was archived, does this go back to a 7 day limit?

Regardless if it does or not, I'm going to be re-uploading once I get to my computer. 00:17 Sat Jul 15

Reuploaded 22:55 Sat Jul 15

It looks like the elder has texture but if that's just the shading then you can ignore this, the stripes look like they should be more dense and smudged

Smooth out the shading on both front legs?

Just as a head's up, the time that you had to wait for Berry to post her version won't count against you. It wasn't something anyone could control, and if someone's got a problem with it, they are more than able to come and talk to me. It's bull to hold that against you when you were waiting for someone else.

Polly (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay so I didn't know I even had Photoshop, and then Snowed gave me the file, and I have zero idea how to get the colors so oopsies. wow that's a looooot of layers snowed how do you even keep track

idk man I just do. it must be magic. also, define the texture.

re-up changes if needed.

Stripes look thicker/more dense on kittypet, and thin out the M on the forehead a little

So, what do you want me to do about the stripe issue? keep in mind that this is a kit image, so stripes are obviously going to be thinner and smaller. Also, seeing as these blanks are in different positions. . . you get the point. Not asking for a second opinion. . . just asking Snowfall to clarify.

Know you're not asking for another opinion, but I know these blanks are a pain in the ass to match designs with, and sometimes you gotta cram tons of stripes into one place. I think it's fine.

The only reason I even mentioned the stripes was because on the kittypet there's more dark brown than light brown showing but I get that it's a small blank and a different angle. Though I still think the M should be more thin if you can make it that, and smooth out the top -> side of the M as well. Lastly, define shading depth a tad?

re-up I'm hesitant to do this, because I don't want it to be too red.

The "M" stripe on the kittypet image has a much more defined shape and is less curved, if that makes sense? Nice image. 18:42, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes should be smudged a bit.

re-up thanks

maybe smudge out the stripes a lil' more, just to give that rougher effect that the KP has

re-up

Define the shading some more. 20:02, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

The light brown spot on the haunch (I think?) near the back paw looks a little out of place, for a lack of a better word. Try smudging the shading towards that area, or just fill it with shading, since there are plenty of blanks that have shading in that specific spot. 00:24, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I hope this is what you mean?

There's waste in the area between the main body and tail. 22:23, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

re-up O.o don't know how that didn't save in gimp

Snail Shell (A) ~ For Approval
I really am proud of this, hope you like it. PepperPiper11 (talk) 18:24, July 5, 2017 (UTC) This is great, Pepper. Define the shading and shading depth. 18:30, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some smaller speckles, kind of like the kit has? This is beautiful.

Smooth out the shading on the furthest hind leg? 18:41, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Purdy! Add some shading to <-- ear and define the earpink in --> ear? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 18:43, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks everyone! PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:07, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think the colors are off a little, because when I was making the warrior, Skye told me that the kit is based off Ashfur's colors

Reuploaded  I did use highlights, that might be the reason why, but I did colorpick the colors again. ^^ PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:28, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

You did a good job for your first image! Define the earpink in the -> ear. Any chance I could get a picture of the image of the image without the highlights? If the white are the highlights, then I would say tone them down a little bit. 19:47, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to match the kit's. I also suggest colorpicking from the kit, as it is the first one in the set. :) This is really good, Pepper, you've got a lot of artistic talent, considering this is your first charart. 20:11, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, as it looks like it's throwing off the coloring. The kit is the first one in this set, as Shypaw said.

Reuploaded Thanks, Shypaw! I colorpicked from the kit, and deleted the highlights. PepperPiper11 (talk) 13:46, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the spots look a little too big, and try smudging them

Reuploaded 15:40, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch a little bit? 18:48, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

SNAILS anyway you should try and soften the spots and make them more round (they look too pointy rn) to match the other images. in addition, i think there are also less spots on the other images :] 00:43, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

on his other images it looks like there are more very faint speckles throughout his pelt. maybe smooth the shading on the hind leg closest to us. 17:20, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

This can be for approval now because it meets that guideline :)

Reuploaded Thx Spooky! 00:18, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the arms, paws, shoulders, and perhaps the back leg. 20:03, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:48, July 11, 2017 (UTC)

The chest shading near the shoulder appears to be leaking away from the lineart

Add some more dapples on the legs and paws, and make the patch on the tail-tip reach the lineart. It looks like it's leaking a bit from the top. 00:27, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:53, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Add a few more dapples to the head.

Reuploaded  20:22, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (Ki) - For Approval
Hi! This is my first charat for an actual canon cat. This is only my fourth charart ever so it's probally not so good. Also, could someone add me to the  character art project as a kit? I'm exited for feedback! Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:37, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Removed alignment. To upload click on a red link with the correct name. Click on "Choose File" and select the image from your device, it should appear on the ---> side of the screen. At the bottom of the page, click on "Upload File" and your done. :) 21:53, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks! Where you explaining to me how to allign the image? And is it good to add to to wiki page?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 22:08, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I was explaining how to upload your charart. Alignments aren't allowed, and I just told you that I removed the alignment that was there. 22:12, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart (it doesn't touch the line art in some places), define the tail and leg shading,smooth the ear pink.

Also, since this is your first charart, the header should be "For Evaluation"

Thanks! I'll be sure to do that. Where should I post the edited one, in tweaks?

Nope, you reupload it onto the same image here. Also, the file needs to be renamed to Stoneclaw.kit.png. Lastly, don't forget your signature.

Alright I fixed it. I just just uploaded on a new file. I could not figure out how to upload the charart sorry!

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:18, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

This is still named incorrectly. Define light on the legs on back paw? 23:37, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

How do you rename the image? I swer i named it correctly...

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

p.s can I be added to the project?

It takes a bit before your join request gets approved. For now on, just upload over File:Stoneclaw.kit.png. 23:41, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Alright I reuploaded the corrected image in File:Stoneclaw.kit.png is it finished?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:55, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The base color looks a tad darker than the other images, and define light on legs more. This is a nice image. :) 00:04, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I tried lighnting it up a bit, but it always looks darker on the website. I also ligntend up the leggies too. Sould I lighten him up more? The thing I'm concerened about is that it does not look really like fur. But his other sprites were like ths. How do you make it look like fur anyway?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 00:59, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the -> leg and smooth the shading on the <- leg? 01:05, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth. Usually to make it look like fur, the artist uses texture. But since his other images don't, you don't have to worry about that. 02:02, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I fixed it! I think the chest light is too bright. Is this ok? And is it blurred well enough?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 02:37, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light a little on the legs. 12:41, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I defined the light and blurred the chest a little bit. Should I efine the shadows cause the cat's other version are like that. Is it ready?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 13:42, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

maybe define the shading depth just a tad. 17:18, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I defined the shading.

Bananablue42903 (talk) 19:18, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it's too dark. Patch said the shading depth, which is where the shading is gradient, going from light to dark. :) 20:05, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth? ErmineGlow (talk) 20:09, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

What do you mean by that?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:10, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

This can be for approval now because it meets that guideline :) And eye depth means making the difference between eye colors different, so instead of it being a flat color, it's a gradient. I'd also say define the light that's on the < side of the flank and define the light on the tail tip

I added eye defination and I defined the light on the flank and the tail tip. Is it ready? Anyone?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 00:45, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Should I upload this to the wiki? Who approves it?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 01:30, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

To answer, it's already uploaded to the wiki^ A lead of the project will come and CBA then approve it when it is ready. (and you're only technically supposed to poke everyone for comments if a full 5 days goes by, by the way). But for the image itself, define the shading depth on the front legs and smooth the chest shading out

I tried to fix it by smuding the light on the chest and I tried to define the shading on the legs. I'm not sure if I did it well. And what does CBA mean again?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 15:39, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs, back paw, and tail. CBA stands for 'Comments Before Approval'

The base color looks too light, the eyes look kind of grayish, and the earpink looks too dark. The shading is leaking on the tail, front legs, belly, and on the side near the back paw

Could you also lighten the shading everywhere? ErmineGlow (talk) 15:37, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

I did both of those things. I just realized... this thread is long. (I guess it's a thread?)

Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:25, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the chest? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:13, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

I tried to smooth it out. This is taking very long so should I send the gimp file to someone to help fix my mistakes. (This is my first time)

Bananablue42903 (talk) 22:12, July 11, 2017 (UTC)

If you use the burn tool to smooth it out, then I suggest using the blur tool. Set it on hard edge at rate 100, it really helps. :) 23:16, July 11, 2017 (UTC)

Thnaks that really helped! Is it good now?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 20:55, July 13, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth on the head? 16:29, July 14, 2017 (UTC)

This is turning out really nice! There appears to be leaking shading on the belly, it should be covered with shading. Also, the tail tip looks to be entirely covered in shading, try to move the shading to the --> side of the tail to match your light source?

Twig (Ki) ~ CBA
Not too happy with this

Smooth the ear pink? + would you like the file for the KP?

Reuploaded Yes!!! jbeane1124@gmail.com tht would be a life saver

Reuploaded 

Define the earpink in --> ear? Pretty! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:57, July 14, 2017 (UTC)

This is beautiful Snowfall! ^^ I'm having a hard time seeing the reddish tabby patches on the tail. Mind lightening the shading there or defining the patches? 00:34, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks guys!

CBA? Very pretty. 22:26, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Alder (W) - CBA
I honest-to-goodness can't remember how I made that kit... Might go and tinker with this after work... Also, don't tell me to match the ES, either, because that really doesn't match the kit at all.

Define the shading depth a little?

Re-uploaded.

CBA?

Crystal (K) ~ For Approval
eh

I think the base is too dark, or the stripes are too light. They seem to contrast more on the queen if that makes sense.. the stripes on the face look thicker on the queen and there should be some white on -> eye. Also the stripe in the middle of the face should connect with <- eye. This pattern looks really difficult to match, and besides a few minor things I think you did a great job

Re-uploaded Thanks man. I tried to fix up the things you asked me to.

Define the shading depth on the face and haunch?

Re-uploaded

Mosspaw (SC) (A) ~ For Approval
Hey y'all. I can't smudge. 19:45, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the farthest ear

Define shading, maybe? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 19:48, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ew, waste. 20:01, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's a white streak of waste in the top left corner.

Mind defining the shading a little more? 22:25, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

The patches aren't smudged right. They seemed to be more smudged in a upper right direction, and are more feathery? Sorry, i can't explaing stuff.

Echosong (Alt.MC) ~ For Approval
He 19:54, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste above both ears, behind the booty, and along her left back leg. Very pretty! 19:59, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Deerdapple (Star) - For Approval
I know the pattern doesn't match like at all, bully me all you want about it. Try to keep comments directed towards shading, texture, and colors. I'll fix up the stripes once (if) I get the elder file from Patch.

Can you define the shading along the jaw? 00:51, 7/18/2017

reups Welcome back my dude

Skywatcher (W) ~ For Approval
I hope this is okay! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:02, July 18, 2017 (UTC)