Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Nettlepaw (a) For approval
My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? -- ♥Shine star♥  19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar ♥Shine ]] star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

oh my star clan! i am soo annoyed! i can't find my nettlepaw file on my computer! -- ♥Shine star♥  21:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (MC) -- For approval
OK, Hollyleaf USED to be here, but I took her down since it wasn't her current rank. So Kestrelflight! Tell me if it needs to be more grey. and yes, I will work on the whiskers and make it full size. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!12:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see any highlights.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:51, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is good Maple, but it doesn't really look any thing like his apprentice picture. And highlights arn't required. Although, shading is, which I don't see any of. --Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I see a little shading, but there definitely needs to be some more added. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:30, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Shading needs to be blurred more. Man, I haven't been on here for awhile!! Oops! I mean cat. LOL! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded OK, blurred shading (but I could do it more...) Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:15, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Looks better. Make the ear pink a little bigger though--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 12:01, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the herbs- they don't look realistic. You might want to color some yellow or brown and make them look like herbs.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 02:35, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:36, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

blurr the shading on the leg and neck.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maplefern Hi!13:32, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Nice siggie Maple! Blur the ear pink a little and perhaps add some more shading Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 16:03, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maplefern Hi!12:51, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments? Maplefern Hi! 15:18, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the back (just below the ears) a tad and it should be ready. (: -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 15:33, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded. Maplefern Hi!16:20, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Maplefern Hi! 22:06, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the white fur. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:13, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's waay too dark, but Reuploaded. Maplefern Hi!16:57, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Nope, it's fine. Add some shading to the white on the paw and the white on the head, too. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Anything else? Maplefern Hi!23:59, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Comments? Maplefern Hi! 22:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Chirp (Lo)-For Approval
Wow I haven't been on in a while! :) Here he is, Chirp! I just love that name...comments?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  11:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's pretty good. Maplefern 11:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a bit more pink in the ears -- Santastar Merry Catmas to all and all a good night! 12:12, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes really need blurred. --Bluestar1776 20:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did that help? P.S. This is my first Charart as a warrior! ^.^ -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:09, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good Mossy!! All I can see is maybe make the shading thicker, and what others osers said. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes just look to dark and "solid" to me... try running the dodge tool over them a bit, and blur them a bit more. -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 21:43, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, thicken the shading (that's on the edge of the lineart, the shading inside the fur caused by the highlights is okay, but either brighten the highlights some more [only a little bit] or darken that other shading as well [only a little bit]), and blur the stripes a lot more. Glad you're back on. ;) These tabby stripes are awesome, by the way. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:37, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for 6 days... please work on it!! -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 22:17, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry...CURSE YOU PREALGEBRA YOU ARE LITERALLY RUINING MY LIFE!!!!! Sorry, I have anger management issues. Will work on it soon.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded the burn tool is my hero :)-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:58, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

color the ear more,but AWSOME!!!my past mentor's past apprentice!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:08, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded Today is my dad's birthday.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  16:59, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, or brighten the highlights a lot. Either one will work. Also, happy late birthday to your dad! -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:07, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I brightnened highlights, and my dad appreciates it. -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:33, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Happy really late birthday to your dad! Anyway, blur the neck shading a bit and it should be good. Maplefern Hi!00:43, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Haha, and reuploaded.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:46, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (CG) - For Approval

 * I sort of darkened the shading a bit too much, didn't I? I tried to do it by looking at the tutorials.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the shading does look a little dark and bumpy. Lighten and even it. Good job though! -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 12:07, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:05, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

nice work Lighting :) there are some white bits of color on the tail lineart, and back lineart. otherwise I lile this. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:00, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! Just a few things 1)The space in between his legs and paws should be gray, not white (See Moss that grows by river, or Night of No Stars) The ear pink and nose pink look purple. Try making them more of a reddish color 3)I see two white pixels on the tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:06, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink so it won't look so purple.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:05, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. Do the mud streaks look a little awkward?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * you have one white pixel on the tail still. as for the mud I've never done it before so don't know :/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:42, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I think that the problem with the mud streaks is that on almost every Tribe cat they're all the same thickness. Normally, they would be narrower at the ends. But, as I said, almost every image has mud streaks like that, so... Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink and the nose pink still look very purple--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:15, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:52, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

You still have a white pixel on your tail. But the ear pink and nose are better. Maplefern 11:44, December 11, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 11:55, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose need to be more of a rosy colour. Also, the mud streaks look painted on. Look at the approved prey-hunter stripes as a good example; these haven't quite been perfected on the caveguards yet. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:36, December 15, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is WAY to bright. It should be more of a samlon color. Darken it a bit. -- ♥Shine star♥  02:21, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


 * I lightened it some time ago, but then Sandy told me to make it a rosy colour, so that's what I did.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:02, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you should go to red (not the pink) and select a pink from there. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!

I know Lightning. I said rosy but I didn't mean bright pink. Look at... Rippletail, Cloudtail, um, I can't think of any more right off the top of my head but look at the aproved images. Sorry for the confusion. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:40, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 05:42, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Run the burn tool over the ear pink and nose pink, it looks hot pink. But it's getting better!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:06, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:19, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:06, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the mud streaks a lot, and then it should be good. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:29, December 22, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:12, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Tadpole (K) -- For Approval!
Hey, Tadpole's back! Since he still didn't have an image and Rainpelt's verson left, I thought i have a go at him. Comments? Hopefully, no concerns!! :) -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Maybe add some highlights,the lineart is a little hard to see.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:04, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

well, i was actually gonna post it again as i have become active here again, but i wont go ohez noez a lot, so no worries from me. i cant see shading, so make it darker, and add a bit more green to the eyes. &#91;&#91;user:rainpelt&#124;rainpelt&#93;&#93; 01:31, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not seeing much eye color... -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:01, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Um, Rainpelt, his eyes are supposed to be amber. Not green.-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded -- Don't know if the changes showed up... -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

his eyes gotta be hazel from what i see. hazel is a greenish brown rainpelt 00:16, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright, make it more of a deep red, and blur it a lot.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:16, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a while. Please update soon, or it'll have to be declined--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. I've been busy with homework and stuff. BTW, how can i make hazel colored eyes when on pixlr, I can only do a single color. Help!! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

What do you mean you can only do a single color? In pixlr, click on the color boxes, and you can change the colors with a lot of variety. (Does that make any sense?) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:16, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it makes sense but I can't get like a hazel color, being that it's a tan+green color, and I don't think you can get that on pixlr. If I'm wrong, then I'm wasteing some space on here. Anyone know what I should do? -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Just make it a brownish color with green in it if possible. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:51, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Fixed it. Don't know if it's too green. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

It's okay, but make the ear pink more of a reddish color. Also, the entire image is too dark, lighten it up a bit. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:34, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Tornear (E) For Approval
Well, I figured Tornear needed an elder picture. What do you think? I tried to make the stripes look as much like his warrior image as I could. How is it?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I love the neck and below, but the head looks bland, add a highlight and some more shading over there.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:45, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better Minnow?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:42, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I love Tornear! He's so cool! And I love the way your tabby stripes turned out! But... Can you blur the shading on the tail? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:41, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys, please don't take this down. When I try to upload it, the changes don't show up. Don't worry, I'll get it fixed!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:06, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Speckletail - For Approval


The pale tabby queen who became an elder. My second cat! Please comment.--Night shine 05:47, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty dang good. The only things I can see would be to blur the tabby markings some more, darken the shading, and darken the ear pink. Onther than that, you did well. ; ) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:26, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Mumble said it all! LOL! Yeah, all I see is the stuff that Mumble already mentioned! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Hopefully I made it better ^^--Night shine 23:32, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Your picture automatically updates, so you don't need to re-post. Just reupload it. As for the image, personally I think the ear pink is too purple. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 23:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the ear pink color--Night shine 01:04, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I think Darkhallows had Speckletail reserved first--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:36, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Night shine, Darkhallows reserved it first and you aren't a member.

Shady's time limit ran out. The two weeks she had to do the image have been used up. I say again;there is no such thing as reserved. Night shine is perfectly able to do this image. Night is a member; check the list. For the image, Night, you need to add more tabby stripes on the chest and on the haunch and blur them in more. Also add some lengthen the shading and blur it into the pelt some more. -- Tinsel claw  22:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Isn't Speckletail a pale brown tabby she-cat?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:24, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is pale brown tabby. -- Tinsel claw  22:28, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know, it looks cream colored to me--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:43, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

she looks great to me!!good tabby markings and shading!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:10, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's really cool.--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Tinselbreeze ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:01, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) - For approval


I was surprised no one had made/reserved him when I did... anyway, he's been gathering dust in my files while I've waited for Snowfur to be approved (she just was!!), so here he is. I think I might need to darken the stripes. Comments? Concerns? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

His eyes are white, he may be blind, but Jayfeather does not have white eyes. Make them blue, please. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 01:46, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink appears purplish and the tabby stripes are too blurred. Feel free to ignore the marking part. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!02:03, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather already has a Mc picture by Dawnfeather-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes are way to blurred. And the highlights on his face look like cobwebs, as do the ones on his legs. Blurr them some more please. And yes, Bracken's right about Dawnfeather's picture. I don't really know if it's been approved, you'll probably have to ask Bramble or Sandy--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:38, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well, Jayfeather is still an apprentice on his page, and he hasn't been reserved by anyone. So I would think that ment I could do him. My computer is sick, so I need to get on my mom's to fix those things. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whilst Dawn's image was very good, it was never submitted for approval as far as I know and so has not been officially accepted by the project. This can stay up. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:04, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sandy. Anyway, I fixed the things you guys said. I had to save a new file because the changes weren't showing up. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink looks kinda, lopsided. Try straightening it more, and make it a little darker. Jayfeather is a tabby, but he hardly has any stripes. Try making them thicker, and adding more. Google a gray tabby for reference. But this is much better than before =)--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:13, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added more stripes and fixed ear pink. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Okay...can you add shading to the shoulderish part? Do you see where I mean? Just dodge tool it and then blur and it looks good!-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and less bright, make it more salmon-ish. And blur it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:53, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed ear pink and shoulder. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:49, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

the earpink needs to be blurred more and maybe darken his tabby stripes a little. I can't really see the ones on his body.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:42, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg's shading needs to be blurred a little more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  20:07, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to darken the stripes without making them too dark. Blurred leg shading and earpink. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:40, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Lionheart (A) For Approval
Okay, I know Ashfoot's queen image used to be here, but I deleted it so I could start over. That big hightlight on her stomach was bothering me too much. So here's Lionheart as an apprentice! Okay, I tried to make his tabby stripes like his warrior image. How is he? Oh and by the way, have any of you noticed that Lionheart's eyes on his charart turned green? I could have sworn they used to be amber! Oh well, I'm not really complaining I just thought it was strange. Anyway, enough of my rambling. Comments?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:58, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

It is a good picture, but read Bramble's caption at the bottom of the page. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, I'm giving people a week, remember? The image looks great, Nightfall. His eyes are green; page 29 of Into the Wild. They may have been mentioned as golden once; I'm not sure, but for now this is fine. I don't see anything wrong right now. -- Tinsel claw  22:10, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! I read your notice, and whipped him right up in one night! Oh and yes, I know his eyes are green in the book, but I meant on his charart. Did somebody change it? I'm sure they used to be colored amber. Anyway, is it ready for approval yet?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:46, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome; just darken the ear pink a little bit and it should be ready. (I'm back~!) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

awsome!!

I promise that I will get to this. (See the comment I left on my Tornear image) My computer won't go to the internet, but the computer I'm using now for some strange reason, won't save the changes I keep trying to make. I'll fix it soon, I promise! Btw, who left the comment above that says "awsome!!" They didn't sign it. Oh well, I just wanted to thank them--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:05, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Can you save the image on one computer and then email it to yourself on the computer that will go on the internet, and then upload the changes? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:51, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Well, I tried that on two computers, and it still wouldn't save the changes. But don't worry, it will be fixed by Wednessday, or Thursday--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:33, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Oatwisker (E)- For approval


what do you think? rainpelt 11:54, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Rainpelt, Lowbranch doesn't even have a description. We need to do cats with descriptions--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:45, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

look at the image summary. names are in a way, descriptions. Branch for one. and eyes often come from the mother. rainpelt 22:01, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

This is true but you still can't be sure.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Rainpelt, but without a known description we can't just give her an assumed one. Unless you can find another cat with a known description for this image, consider it declined. -- Tinsel claw  22:31, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

made it into an elder using same colors. rainpelt 00:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is very bumpy and uneven, please even it out. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 00:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED fixed that. rainpelt 00:37, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The glare in his eye is blue, it needs to be white--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:40, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOAGED added glare and ear pink. rainpelt 00:43, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The glare has to be white Rain, right now it's gray--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:00, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

it is. rainpelt 01:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

For future reference, the "glare" is the highlight (that's what we call it) and it is white, Nightfall. Rain (is it ok if I call you that?), just add shading on the chest, in between the legs, and under the tail. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 01:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. fixing other stuff as some guy in yougomaglaslafia speaks :p rainpelt 01:39, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry. I see that now. When you look at my computer screen from a certain angle, it makes everything darker, and it looked gray then.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:48, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

You need to change the file name and his page says he is a tabby.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I have already reserved Oatwhisker,and I am almost ready to put him up for approval. '''FirePelt 21:11, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

this has been up for a while Firepelt and I think Rainpelt had him first.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:16, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Ohh........Then I'll delete mine,the stripes are turning out horrible anyways.If you are going to have a cat for oatwhisker Rainpelt,Change the file name and add the tabby stripes. '''FirePelt 21:22, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I think he needs more stripes and they need to be blurred some more.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:36, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Ashshadow,needs more stripes and they need blurred,and PLEASE change the file name from Lowbranch to Oatwhisker. '''FirePelt 01:20, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

add mor tabby markings.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  10:17, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

PLEASE CHANGE THE FILE NAME FROM LOWBRANCH TO OATWHISKER. '''FirePelt 03:41, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval


Heheh, she's so nice. :-) One of the images is about to be deleted, so it wont be 36 for long. Comments? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:29, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Agreed. Poor Minty! Anyway, onto the image, I think you need to blur the highlights a bit more, and maybe lighten the ear pink. But, otherwise, she looks awesome, Mumble! -- Angelstar Silver Bells 19:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! I'll get onto that ASAP. ;-) -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 19:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I think Nightfall101 had her already! i swear! but this is good Mumble!--Echopaw 21:15, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm... I know it says she's a queen on her page, but she isn't really. If she needed an image, she would be a loner. She had her kits as a loner, and the term queen is only used in Clans, just as kit-mother is used in the Tribe. Other loner/rogue she-cats who had kits aren't classified as queens, such as Sasha. It would be different if this was like Daisy, who had her kits and then joined a Clan, but Minty never joined or will join a Clan. So I don't think she should have a queen image, but a loner image instead. Please correct me if I'm wrong. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:41, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I see where you're coming from Bluestar but the definition of queen is any she-cat expecting or nursing kits. As for the image it's really good but I agree with Angelstar.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome Mumble! But I do agree with Bluestar. I think she should have a loner blank rather than a queen blank. Oh and Echo, yes, I did have her reserved for a while, but I had never done a loner before, and when I tried doing Minty, it didn't turn out so good. So, I decided to let someone else do her--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I discussed my view on this with Bluestar; you can see on her talk page. The bottom line is that this is the correct blank; she-cat nursing kits or pregnant is a queen, thus she be used with a queen blank. Tinsel claw  22:22, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

When I checked nobody had reserved her...? I'm gonna take a look at the discussion, and decide what to do about the blank, but I think I might stick with the queen; A queen is really just a pregnant or nursing she-cat. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:44, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Blurred her more, kept the blank the same. Anything else? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of dark, but that's just my opinion. Ignore me if you think the color is good. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 16:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. I'll lighten it up a tad, as well as the shading. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 16:25, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Sorry it took so long, I was busy. Lightened the ear pink, but left the shading alone. Anything else? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 22:51, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks nice.Lighten the shading a tad,please. '''FirePelt  01:22, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

kk. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

UPLOADED. That's the best I could do. :P -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:21, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

It looks better!(Shading wise,everytihng else is perfect)You are a talented artist I have to tell you that!(^=._.=^) '''FirePelt 02:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Husker (Lo) For Approval
I think this is my best image ever! -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Uh, some spots seem to have not shading, like the belly.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Mosspath is right. His belly needs shading, not his back. And if you want highlights, use the dodge tool and mark the shoulder and haunch. Blur too.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 03:19, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the yellow fur on his head looks, weird. I don't own any of the Graystripe manga books, but I've read them in Barnes and Noble. I saw Huskar's picture, and the hay colored fur on his head isn't behind his ears. I know this might be difficult to do, but I would suggest drawing a little tuft of fur on his head, and color it in ginger. And delete the one behind the ears--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:36, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The mangas are gray. Does it ever even say anywhere that the tuft of fur on his head is hay-colored? If it were me, it would make it a patch of either light or darker gray. -- Tinsel claw  22:23, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

It does say on his page that he has hay colored fur on his head. -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 23:10, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

An official confirmation. Husker's article is not official. It is very likely that some person just thought hay-colored fur, and put it in. Many people put in false descriptions. Unless you find somewhere a colored official picture of Husker, or a confirmation from Victoria Holmes, then turn the head tuft dark or light gray. Tinsel claw  01:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:20, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Right now the shading is too dark and needs to be blurred more as well as the highlights.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded, how's this? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 13:02, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Still, the highlights need to be blurred more. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 14:23, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? If it still is not blurred enough, please show me how much to blur it, because pixlr.com won't let me blur them more. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 14:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC) its a bit blurred...-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:47, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

You need to blur more. I'd advise you take out the highlights and just add more shading. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:05, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

A few things: 1) I can barely see the patch of gray, 2) The ear pink is too bright, make it more rosy, but less pink.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  20:02, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this, I got rid of the highlights, and added shading. Please don't get rid of this image! I will be going awqay on a trip for a week or two and won't have access to a computer. I promise, If there is something wrong with the image, I will fix it when I get back!!! Please don't take down this image! I like it! My best image ever! -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 18:42, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:55, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) for Approval
well here she is!--Echopaw 21:03, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw, please put this as a full size image; it is hard to see. Also, this has too many images on it now. When some get approved, you may put this back up. -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:09, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I really don't know how to do that this is meh first charrie!--Echopaw 22:02, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

On the project page click on the image before saving it. This isnt bad for your first charart either.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:05, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing it again. Also, approval is spelled wrong. I fixed the title for you. Also sign with the four tildes ~ like that but four and nothing else. :) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:09, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED okay here she is!

Okay, just a quick q...what program do you use? I don't see any shading/highlights, and if it's Paint, there are no tools to make shading/highlights.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Pixlr.comEchopaw 22:34, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I thought I had Half Moon Reserved?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 00:37, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Ohh i didn't see:'C- Echopaw 01:35, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw had Half Moon on her list first, actually. You need to blur the shading, but other than that the image is well done. Tinsel claw  01:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED here she is i blured the shadings!:) --&#91;&#91;User:Echopaw&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:green; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;&quot;&gt;:D Santapaw ♥&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&#91;&#91;User talk:Echopaw &#124;&lt;sup&gt;&lt;span style=&quot;color:yellow&quot;&gt;&#39;Have a great Christmas!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/sup&gt;&#93;&#93; 03:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

good!!,but you need a siggie.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:14, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Me and my stupid siggy >:D --Echopaw 12:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw you dont need to upload a new version of the image each time. Also there are some gray spots in the background.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 16:43, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay i h8 saying reuploaded so here she is for the...4 time...IDK oh well any thing wrong with here? because this charrie being approved near christmas could be the best gift you could give(but charries and siggys would be nice but this would be better!) did i say to much? moving on is she okay!--Echopaw 17:09, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading again, mostly near the front right leg (her right) and there's some gray on the image, but I don't know if that's just my computer. If you don't mind, I can erase the gray spots for you. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I'm lazy but thank you blackclaw!':) I would not mind you doing that --Santaclaws is here! 15:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, the red's where the lineart's blurred, the blue is where the shading needs blurred, the yellow is where shading is needed and the green is where highlights are needed. Hope this helps! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:56, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I won't be doing it any time soon cause of christmas! :'(--HI 13:13, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I'll probally start working back on heron new years eve sorry!--HI 13:09, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I hope you don't mind, but I fixed those things for you. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Uhh....could you please delete all o the pictures except for the one that you actually have up for approval? I can't tell which one is for approval, and also, please reupload onto the same image each time instead of having a new file each time. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:45, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Foxleap (W)-For Approval


I have to say, THANK YOU ICESTORM!!! :D I like this picture WAYYYY better than my Ryewhisker!!! Well, here is Foxleap!-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:17, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Well, this is good Moss, but two things. 1)The image has to be full size. 2) The coloring is wrong, Foxleap is red brown tabby. Right now it's just brown tabby. Look at his apprentice picture for help-Foxleap--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

It is the right size Nightfall... the colourig could be more reddish though. Apart from that, this is really very good. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:09, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded Did it change? Or is it still on the original?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  16:53, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

It changed, but it still doesn't look like the same color as on his apprentice image. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:53, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded did I get it right this time?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:59, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Make it a LITTLE redder.-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 03:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Mouse is right. This looks way to brown. Look at his apprentice picture---Foxleap--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:42, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

'Reuploaded-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:54, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This looks much better. I can barely see the ear pink, though. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:00, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, but I still think it looks to, brownish-orange--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:03, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

1) Reuploaded made ear pink lighter, more visible and 2) I think it's fine, but I might just be saying that becuase it's my image...what does everyone else say? I always pictured Foxleap looking more russety than Firestar-red.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:07, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I know, I'm sorry Moss. It really is a good image, it's just the color that's bothering me. But the seniors might think differently--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:10, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

We'll see what they think. Acutally, I might make the stripes more visible anyways, they're too faint. (I know, I'm corredting myself :D)-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, the stripes faint, maybe darken them? Also, color wise, it does look more orange than red...maybe try using the sponge tool or red eye whatever-it's-called tool? (it's an eye that's looking at you on the toolbar). -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:42, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkned tabby stripes. I tried the red-eye tool, but it made the picture grayscale instead. Also, on the apprentice image, it looks a little orange so that's how I kept it.-- Scroogepath Bahumbug!  01:00, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) - For Approval
My first tabby. I did the best I could. I really want this approved by Christmas. Please! Comments before Christmas? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:28, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe more shading and some more stripes.-- Darkhallows 12:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink more, add more shading and blend, darken the tabby sttipes, and add more tabby stripes. Also, make them a little more wavy and not strait y's.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 17:55, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Wait I am too lazy to put the Reuploaded sign up. Wait I just did! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks messy. Blur it and add highlights to the head and tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Try adding some tabby stripes to the face, and make them less of a pattern of Ys but soe squggly lines, some Ys, and some little dashes in between the lines.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  20:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Um I don't get what your saying. Help? -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 21:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Icestorm, she means that the stripes are shaped liked 'Y's. Add a line in between some of them and make them smaller. Maplefern Hi!14:09, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Ice- For Approval
I know I'm exceeding the image limit, but I've been waiting a couple of days now for it to go down, and it hasn't. But since one image is in the "24-Hour-Stage" I thought it would be okay for me to post. Constructments? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 17:07, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, just add some shading on the back on the rear leg and make the claws and teeth go in different directions and not all in one. It just makes it look a little better, if you don't want to do it, then it's fine.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 17:53, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

It's no problem. =) I love doing Charart, so you can tell me to do whatever you want me to do to the image, and I won't mind. ;) -- Angelstar Silver Bells 18:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading? Also do what Minnow says and I think this is ready. :) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Add a highlight or move the shading back.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 02:52, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, guys; I'll work on him as soon as I can. The internet is down right now on my computer (I'm on my mom's laptop), so I can't work on him. =( But I'll work on him over the weekend; I'm pretty sure our internet will be fixed by then. -- Angelstar Silver Bells 20:54, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (R)- For Approval
Well, I know this is past the image limit, but I will be busy and might not be able to post, so here. Comments?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:05, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! Just darken the tail a bit more, blur the stripes on the tail, and make the ear pink pinkish. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:06, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 02:27, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and ear pink more.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 02:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else?-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 16:24, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Not that I see. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:31, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Icicle - For Approval
I know it needs work but I've stared at it so long I don't know what. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 18:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC) i think its nice but i think you need to make the eyes brighter ~iceyfang

White chest is too bright. Maplefern Hi!22:22, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I know that she is a pale gray she-cat, but right no she looks white. Darken the whole thing a bit.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 02:49, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Violet(R)-For Approval


Hawkfire gave me Violet to work on,improve,and fishish about 2 minutes before she eft.I did the shading,ect. and now Im putting her up for approval.Comments?Questions?help?critique? '''FirePelt 05:04, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

It's very good Fire! But, she looks very yellow. She's supposed to be orange, with thin darker orange stripes. I'm not sure if there's a way to change the color without starting over... oh, maybe you could try running the burn tool over her a couple of times? What do you guys think?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:45, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Millie(Q)- For approval
-- ok since whitewing is approved i thought i'd put up Millie. she is my first tabby! and i am quite proud of her. comments? <font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

Looks good. The thing is, The stripes should be thinner --Rainstripe c: 16:33, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, discounting the 3 discussion sections this just fits nto 35 images. The stripes need to be less cartoony; look at some aproved tabbies for reference. There are a few different styles you can try. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ears are too dark and need blurring. Sandy's right. The tabby markings are too thick, and could do with more blurring. --Birchy (I don't know how to get a signature!!)

The tabby stripes need to look more like Millie's stripes on her warrior image. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, the ear pink needs blurred, and fix the color; make it more like the color in Millie's warrior image. You don't need ear pink on the ear farthest from us (the left ear), so get rid of that. You need to make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image, and then blur the stripes. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 15:38, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image,please.Blur the ear pink,fix color,like her warrior image.Delete the farthest ear pink,it's not needed.I can see your proud to,everyone is for there first's of anything!-- '''FirePelt  02:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Shellheart(D)-For approval
My first official Char art. I like the way he turned out. Pretty Pretty c: Ready for approval! Comments? --Rainstripe c: 17:17, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

is it me or do i see a gray blurr on its chest ~iceyfang

Looks good! I would blur the shading, though, and the eyes need to have a glare and pupil. See Icethroat's tutorials for info on how to do the eye. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 18:08, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Bluestar1776.Blur the shading.I did the eye for you.(sorry if you get mad,I wanted to help you!) '''FirePelt 18:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt, you need to give users a chance to improve for themselves; this is Rainstripe's first charart afterall. Rainstripe and Iceyfang, please sign with ~. As for the image, it needs ear pink. Take a look at some tutorials for how to do this if you are stuck. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:38, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded with ear pink and more blur. --Rainstripe c: 18:55, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good, Ranstripe:D But, the ear pink should only be on one ear (the one that is on the side of the head that is facing us). --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 19:09, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded fixed ear pink. Ready for approval!!--Rainstripe c: 19:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

i still see gray on his chest Iceyfang 19:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Its shading. Durr --Rainstripe c: 19:31, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

No, I think I see it too, a paler grey - the shading should reach the lineart. Also, the ear pink needs to be smaller and a more rosy/salmon colour. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:34, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded. Fixed

Please remember to sign all of your posts with the four tildes(~). I see a shadow behind him. It shouldn't be there.-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 21:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded P: --Rainstripe c: 22:46, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

His back looks faded and that gray patch is still on the front of him.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:48, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Whole image redone. --Rainstripe c: 23:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

the eyes seem yo be life less can give the eyes a puil Iceyfang 23:59, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Check Icethroat21's tutorial for eye diagrams. The spots look. . . circular. Make them more uneven and natural, like on Brambleberry. The ear pink is way too large. Make it smaller and darker and blur it.-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 15:44, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Raineh 20:20, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

i think theres some gray in the open spots or it might be me Iceyfang 22:23, December 23, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Stormfur (CG) - For approval


I have no clue where he went, so here he is again! xD -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

nice job Iceyfang 00:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Darken the ear pink and mudstreaks. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 12:58, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

His earpink seems crooked. Maplefern Hi!15:28, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed ear pink and mud streaks. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 15:57, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Blur all of the mud streaks multiple times until they're blurred really good. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:46, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 20:31, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Yup. Add couple of highlights, or darken the shading, I can barely tell the difference between the shading and the actual fur color. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 20:57, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I think the earpink is too bright for a gray cat.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:26, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 20:45, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

One, make the earpink less hot pink, and two, the mud patch on his back is too round...and least for me...try making it just a streak, not patchy.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  23:37, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Fallowtail- For Approval
It's one of my first chararts and I'll be willing to take any comments on it. --Echoheart 12:12, December 21, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

Their are highlights above her paw, I don't know if their suppose to be their if so blur them if not get rid of them. Darken the ear pink and maybe thicken the shading. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 12:56, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading near her belly. Maplefern Hi!13:06, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

It looks pixelated, and this is because you saved it on a jpg file. Unfortunately, you have to redo it and then save it on a png file. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 15:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think you have to redo it now. Just run the sharpen tool over it once or twice and save it as png.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:46, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be me being picky, but I don't really think the color is quite right. Her description says "light brown" this is like, golden-yellow.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Echoheart 12:28, December 23, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

Stonestar(L) - For Approval
I TRIPLE-CHECKEDthis time. So I do NOT think anyone else has done this. If they have, I will wallow in shame. Much shame. Anyway, here is a charart of Stonestar. Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 00:33, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful charart. And No, It hasn't been done/reserved. Try shading the outside of the Hing leg. Maplefern Hi! 00:52, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

This is lovely Wolfie. (I'm going to start calling you that. :P) Just blur the shading a bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:29, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Okey dokey; i will when I get home. I'm at school right now. And I did put shading on the hindleg, but I guess it's too teeny to be seen. I'll fix it, as well as blurring the shading. --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 15:50, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 17:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Dove's Wing - For Approval


Um.. yeah, Jay's Wing's sister. Constructments? Bramble -sama  16:22, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading by his leags a little more, but it's BEAUTIFUL!!!!!-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 16:26, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful Bramble! I see nothign wrong. Hidden -jingle ♪  17:54, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Just blend the chest shading a little and she'll be good to go. =) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas!  18:05, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

All shading has been blended. In hindsight, I probably should have made this a longhaired cat, as she's probably Dovepaw's counterpart just as Jayfeather's was Jay's Wing, but all well. Anything else? -- Bramble -sama  18:07, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Not that I see. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Wonderful image,Bramble.She should be approved. '''FirePelt 03:31, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Dapplenose (E) - For Approvel
...Haven't done of these in three months, so don't be too hard. It's horrible, I know. By the way, my birthday's tomorrow! Yay me. ^^--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:59, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Happpy birthday! Anyway, the whisker is blurred. Maplefern

Add ear pink --Icecloud33 01:52, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Good, but Dapplenose is mottled. She looks more like solid gray in this picture--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:38, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Weird. It looks are blurry but it isn't on my computer. O.o I'll go fix it. -.-;--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:20, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Gorsetail (NP Warrior)-for approval
Here's Gorsetail...I'm pretty sure nobody's reserved him...so..how is he?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 18:40, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! --Raineh 00:13, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Very good job! Just darken the ear pink a little, so we can see it, and blur some of the highlights.--<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:16, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Heavystep (E) - For Approval
I know I'm past the limit, but at least 4 images are in the approval stage, so I figured it was okay. Anyway, my first tabby! Comments/Criticism? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This looks really good, Rainwhisker! All I can see is to make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and to maybe add a stripe or two in the middle on the hind leg in what looks like an empty space. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:36, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Swallowtail -For approval
My first Charart What do you think?
 * --Icecloud33 01:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


 * nice something I see is the line of shading is very distinct. Trying using te blur tool to soften it up a bit. Also, you need more shading, and the shading shouldn't be in such a straight line, it should hug to the edge of the picture. And the ear pink is slightly too low try puting it more in the ear. Other then that it's looking very nice :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:30, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Is this better? --Icecloud33 19:21, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Leafpool(W)-For Approval
my second charart...comments??-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  10:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


 * it needs more shading, all the tail is a good thing to do and the ear with out the earpink on it can have shading on it to, other then that for now I can't see any thing else. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:34, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


 * Is this charart leafpool? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This doesn't look much like her Medicine cat version Icecloud33 13:41, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Try to smudge and blur the tabby markings to make them look more natural. Otherwise, it's good! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 17:55, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Try to make it more of a sandy brown, as she probally got her fur color from Sandstorm. Make the chest white go up to her face, like in Leafpool's medicine cat image. The eyes also seem to be going off the lineart a bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 20:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  08:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the color is much better. But I still have a few things

1. The stripes on her back need to be connected to her back in some way

2. The stripes need to be blurred more

3. The white on her chest is still way to big

4. The white on her chest needs to stretch up to her face

5. The white on her paws should be smudged into her pelt and then blurred

Here's something you should do. Save Leafpool's approved medicine cat image, and then bring it up in your art program along with your image. That way you can make it as close as possible--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Hareflight(W) - Withdrawing


I know this is over the limit but there are more than 3 cats with "Comments before approval". Please take this out if it way over the limit. Comments? Hidden -jingle ♪  16:30, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Should I withdraw this because I'm going to go on a small christmas vacation and I won't be able to go on teh computer this whole week. But when I come back I will put her back up again. Hidden -jingle ♪  22:44, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Hidden, but it would be much better if you would withdraw this, that way it would make room for other images to be put up and then approved while you were gone. Thanks so much, and you can put it back up as soon as you get back. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Scree Beneath Winter Sky-For Approval
My first cavegaurd. I must say im pretty proud of it. Comments? -- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:32, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Is he a tabby or is that mud? If he's not covered in mud, you might want to add some in a more reddish shade so it doesn't blend with the markings. I really like this, though! Good job! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 17:56, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I don't get what you're saying. He's a tabby and has mudstreaks. Are you saying to make the mud more red?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 18:05, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

That is exactly what Wolfie is saying. Add more red or darken them. I can't see them. Maplefern

Well brown wouldnt really show up on brown and he is described as mud-colored.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 02:44, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Duskfur (Q) - For Approval
Meh, minor character. Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 17:35, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading some and then it should be good. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:31, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the shading more. Better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 21:51, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful Hawk! How in the world do you do your stripes?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:50, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Nightfall:D I make my stripes using the awesome and magical combination of the burn, blur, and smudge tool: drawing the stripes with the burn tool, blurring them, then smudging them in the direction that the fur should should be going in certain areas (if that makes any sense). --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 01:18, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Hawktalon, you should make a tutorial if you ever get a minute or two. Even if it doesn't have pictures. No wonder when I tried to make tabby stripes like you do it looked weird, I smudged and then blurred. :) Do you add shading first or the stripes first? (The image itself looks lovely, as usual I'm waiting until this has been up for a while longer to put it on 24 hours. :P). -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:33, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Crag(CG)-For Approval


This is my first ever cave guard.I'm not shure about the mud streaks though.Comments?Critque?Questions?Help? '''FirePelt 05:06, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Whitewater (E) - For Approval
*shrugs* Not much to say for thie one. I know she already has a warrior image, but she's an elder now, and needs an elder image. Comments and suggestions? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:00, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading from the back of the neck to the tip of the tail. She's beautiful :D-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:23, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:39, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect! But that's up to the senior warriors...-- Scroogepath Bahumbug!  00:42, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Wonderful job,Icethroat.I always though you where a VERY talented artist.Again,amazing job! '''FirePelt 05:09, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

hi!
hi i would really like to join!

-Birdsplash

Troutpaw - For Approval


I really hope this isn't considered over the 35 image limit. :S I figured that because three chararts were Withdrawn/Declined that I was able to post something.. If not, feel free to remove this! Also, I had to upload it under a different file name, because Troutpaw was taken. :\ -- Quiet !... 04:55, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

This is so, freakin, AWSOME!!!! But there's just one tiny little thing, the gray on her ear tip could prbably be blurred a little more. But other than that, I really and honestly can't find anything wrong with it! But tell me, how do you do your stripes? I really need to get GIMP...--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:35, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed Figured someone would say something about the ear pink. XD Actually, though, I don't use GIMP, I have PS5. Pretty similar, though, in terms of what you can make with them. This is my first tabby charart here, I decided to keep it simple and just do lines or varying sizes, similar to what I see on normal tabbies, and I'm not a huge fan of the "Y" markings.. I like things a little more complicated. I'll get right on fixing that ear pink, then. -- Quiet !... 08:48, December 24, 2009 (UTC)