Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes and make the ear-pink a bit redder 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The furry effect needs to be smudged an blurred, and perhaps lightened. It looks like tabby stripes on the brown. 06:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't smudge it, because it's smudged to the limit; but it has been blurred. The earpink will remain untouched, since it's from the warrior. 16:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brown's too dark and the furry texture still looks like stripes. 00:30, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Which brown? The main one, or the texture brown? 18:17, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

I believe she is talking about the main brown. 00:29, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

I got the main brown from the image, but I'll fix the fur texture in a little while. 19:10, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:19, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

The brown in general looks much too dark. It looks near black. Lighten it. 01:13, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Hollowflight (A) - Redone
- His pale belly went too far into his stomach, he was too dark, and his stripes were too oversmudged. And oh my god I failed on this one. Especially the smudging...Comments? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! :3 Just smudge the pale belly a bit to look like the other image. ^^ 02:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

His pale belly isn't smudged in his warrior...at least, not as far as I can tell. 02:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yes it is. Please smudge it. 06:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

And can you make the unshaded brown a tad lighter? (I think that's the word I'm after) Skt Spoilers... 10:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Skt, the "unshaded" brown's color code was taken from the warrior image. But if others agree, I'll lighten it. 18:00, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but I agree. Either that or thin out the shading a bit and add/brighten the highlights. 05:25, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to have to re-do this because I got my computer back and my file isn't on this....and the computer I was doing Hollowpaw on is broken. So this is going to be redone later. 17:15, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Redone. 22:59, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

forgot the white pixels in the eyes? XD 23:40, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: ...I'm an epic fail. 23:43, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are a bit too smudged, can you fix that? 20:18, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Re-did the stripes. 02:58, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E) - Tweaked
Tweaked color to be more brown. I think this is too dark though. OA was Paleh (I think) Comments? e.e 08:05, 25, 06, 2012

I dunno about the darkness, but make the skin less fluro. Skt Spoilers... 12:42, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I so failed on that. -has no brain- xDDD 10:01, 26, 06, 2012

Can you make the patches a little less neon? 15:38, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  09:32, 27, 06, 2012

Can you fix the ear pink? It seems...out of place...or something like that. Just shrink it a bit, maybe?

Reuploaded -  06:40, 28, 06, 2012

Could you blur the earpink a little? 20:10, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also make it a little less saturated? It seems...neon.

Nightwhisper (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Scarlet and I re-did the shading ouo Comments? 09:21, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Skt Spoilers... 11:05, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I also lightened the shdaing. I felt it was too dark~ 09:47, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't really look brown, in my opinion... Can you fix that? 15:57, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

The base pelt colour came from the original warrior. o.0 06:15, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

While it's up you need to change the color, and also to match the rogue image. :3 09:35, 27, 06, 2012

Oakheart (Alt.Kit) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to match alt deputy. Not sure about changes. 17:58, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? Unless it already matches the deputy. 17:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:32, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

I tried a new method of shading. ...and it hates me... Re-Ups^ 23:25, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda dull/ashy against a brown cat. Thicken it a bit and darken it on the tail. Bright/define the ear-pink just a touch. 01:24, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just made her a bit darker to match her other images. 02:20, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading, if possible?

Reuploaded  02:32, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad, and make the shading less brown tinted and more of a grayish color for consistancy. :3 09:22, 26, 06, 2012

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing, I believe. ^^  15:53, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the belly highlight, and the haunch one too? 17:49, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also blur the ear pink a tiny bit? 15:43, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the belly and haunch highlight and the earpink. 20:55, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Birdy (Ki) ~ Tweaked


I swear on my family and friend and my first unborn child's lives, I swear on my Aunt Tina and Patpa's graves, I swear to the face of God. This isn't redone. I say that very solemly. I opned up her files I saved, delted her shading file(Only way to tweak her shading) and redid her shading, killed the blurred lineart, and made the blob on her forehead look like a stripe. OA was Sandstar12 with a redone by some freak named Padfoot. Comments? 02:25, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Oi, Maple. That's not really necessary... Anyways, define the shading.

Define and enlarge the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 10:56, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I said that, Skye, because I showed it to some people, and they all thought it looked redone. The shading...I'll fix that now. To dark in some places.... 17:00, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Could you also give it a light source? Right now, it just seems like a blotch of shading.

Reuploaded. 17:27, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink less magenta and define the unshaded parts? 20:58, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

'Uploaded. 02:52, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (SC) - Tweaked
She needed darker shading. I also lightened her so she'd be more silver. DON'T kill me, but I added a fur texture... -runs from Mounty- OA was Moonpelt1786. 02:20, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Ki) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading. Changes might not be showing, and I personally believe it could be blended a bit more. x3 OA was Sunleap. Comments? 06:54, 28, 06, 2012

I believe someone forgot to add it when they put this on the tweaks needing to be done list, but this also needed to be darkened to match her other images. also, dull the highlights. 11:21, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. W) ~ Redone
I'm sorry, but there was no way I could keep this a tweak. I never had original layers for this one, since it was my first approved charart from scratch, I had to re-do the coloring, the fur length, and, frankly, that horrid shading. x.x OA was me, as my mini-rant states. XD 00:43, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

I just realized I made the shading wayy too dark. I'll fix that in the next upload. 00:44, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the shading a bit? Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 00:47, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit. 00:52, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA is Flamingomom3, with a redo by Mintstarr. Shading had some issues, and it needed to be darker. Overly dark shading is overly dark, me thinks.

Millie (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA is Crows (I think this is one of the only older images left... o.o), and the shading needed to be defined/the image needed to be darkened.

It's too dark now. Shading and stripes. and the main pelt is still too light. 02:23, June 29, 2012 (UTC)