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Onestar (Alt W) ~ For Evaluation
Should match his description from TUG CloudymoonTheCat

Hm, might just be me or the coloring, but the shading along the lineart seems to be leaking pretty much everywhere.

15:34, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

You did the stripes amazingly! But, Define shading all over except for the tail. And since you're still a kit iirc, until a kit is promoted to apprentice it should be For Evaluation, but correct me if I'm wrong. SquidwardPlays 15:50, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

On the topic of shading, is it tinted? Tinting it with a color might help me see it better. Potato Flakin (talk) 16:16, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

It would be 'For Evaluation', yes. Also, make the stripes thinner and add more of them, per the leader alt it needs to match

There needs to be more white in between the light brown. The leader alt also appears to not have any dark brown on it, so remove that. I forgot to say this is lovely Cloudymoon!Potato Flakin (talk) 19:29, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

In 'dark brown' do you mean the stripes or the base colour? Because he Have dark stripes if you zoom in CloudymoonTheCat

Lemme rephrase that- lighten them, they are way darker that the leader. I meant the stripes.--Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the pale parts to match the leader and make the tail become lighter as it approaches the tail tip. 14:39, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I re-uploaded it - I tried to define the shading, and I changed the base colour and the stripes and swirls. CloudymoonTheCat

You're getting there! Warm the brown (lighten it) a bit more to match the leader, which I'll link here. Can you also whiten the white parts? They look cream.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The overblurred look on this image may be a result of putting everything on the same layer. Are you using multiple layers?

I do use multiply layers. I'll try to fix everything that you said :) CloudymoonTheCat

Try using pure white?

Define tail shading. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [07:09, 12/30/2018 ]

Re-uploaded it again CloudymoonTheCat

Uh Oh! It appears you alligned the image. Make sure when you reupload remove the "|left|". Can you dethumb this real quick?Potato Flakin (talk) 14:40, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

nah they just thumbnailed it. make sure not to upload them as a thumbnail. I've removed it for you, but keep that in mind when uploading more chararts. The stripes also taper more, and they aren't as thick and blurry as they are here. (sorry if that seemed rude) Taper out the stripes, and maybe smudge them. Expand the shading as well, and smooth it out.

Still working?

Yes, I'm sick so it'll take me some time :/ CloudymoonTheCat

From my comment above, do you want continue working on this? The warrior blanks are going to be redone, so you may want to finish this, but it also will be redone in the future (by you or anyone else.) Would you still want to work on this? 04:04, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Littlecloud(mc alt 2)~for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​​​​​​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to  the  alt  mentioned  above  by  Echo, this  would  have  to  be  renamed  '' File:Littlecloud. mc. alt2. png ''. Mind fixing  that  real  quick  Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^

17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The darker stripes on the face should be thinner, and all of the stripes should be more jagged^^ There's also a slight layer of texture going underneath them, on the mca ~

Define your light source. Its pretty hard to distinguish it. If you need help with it, you may find the Apprentice Tutorials helpful. <span style="">16:43 Sun Dec 30

Still working? 00:05, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

If you are still working, there's this area outside the right hind leg that shouldn't be filled in. I'll send you a screenshot later when I have time to get on the computer.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:26, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go!Potato Flakin (talk) 04:24, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, sorry for the break, I just had thingd going on, and life, but I got it up! : )<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:57, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, that shading tho! I dont know what I was doing, but I fixed the shading<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yes, much better. There are some things that still need to be addressed, but take your time. The stripes need to be smudged and sharpened a bit more. I would recommend you take the colors of his apprentice, or medicine cat apprentice. The earpink is much lighter on the other images, and the two stripes on the face are blotchy. Seperate them so they are two stripes, then smooth and sharpen them to match the kit. Whiten the white, and define the shading (have you tried tinting your shading? It's magic) This is very good Owlbite, you are doing well.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I sort-of like it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite! Whiten the white on the legs, thin out the face stripes, and define the shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:12, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, face stripes cant get any thiner. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:26, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I understand. Where's your lightsouce here? If there is one please define it. Potato Flakin (talk) 04:29, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading too? I can't tell where the light source is either, but I think that may just be because I can't make out where a lot of the shading is. 13:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC) I will definitely the light, but look at the light in the eyes.<font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 16:38, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't have white markings or pale around the earpink^

Firestar (Alt L 5) - For Approval
Another one, Squid? Why, yes, Because I have too much fun making charart! Can't stop and won't stop uwu. I like this one, I'm just not completely sure if the longhair blank was the right one. I'll change it to short if needed. All colors picked from the image File:Firestar.GA2.png <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:46, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

He seems to be shown as a shorthair, so I'd say use the shorthair blank. 00:17, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I did it, but when I went in to convert to short, some things had seemed to have gotten messed up and/or deleted, being the muzzle color, earpink, and shading, so i redid those things too. The new shading might be a bit light, but I'll fix it in a bit. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:47, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Would you define the light on the tail, when you do go to fix the shading. 00:57, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

There's some weird black line beneath his feet.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:24, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Along with Potato's comment, the chest fur looks weird to me. 𝕊𝕚𝕝   𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 06:53, 12/31/2018 ]

Shouldn't he have a slightly defined paler muzzle? Malina457 (talk) 15:45, December 31, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you define the light on the < front leg? There'd be a little more with that source, I'd think

Define the earpink a bit more, it blends in with the pelt.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:24, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reups To be honest, I hated it when I changed ti to shorthair,so I redid it completely and I like it more now. Re-colorpicked from the image best i could. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:05, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

It might be just me but the eyes seem a tad crosseyed. 00:17, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. There's been several leader images with that pixel placement. Could you define the light on the front legs and <--- haunch? 01:58, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, I think the light could benefit from being defined everywhere. 05:51, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

This looks really good so far! But his eyes seem a little dull of color compared to the image. I don't know if you have to or not, but you might have to add the stripes on his forehead. idk COOLcat9352 (talk) 20:38, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Defined light, and the eyes should be fine. I still picked them from pixels of the image's eye. and I did actually consider the forehead stripes, but I want another opinion just incase before I do. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 21:06, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Oops, it cropped wrong. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 21:08, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste everywhere.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:57, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:12, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

If they're on the image, then yeah I would add the stripes. There's still little light on the legs. Try erasing some of the shading so the pattern between the shaded and non-shaded part is visible. Right now it looks very flat. 22:25, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Squidward, would you like to continue working on this? The leader blanks are up for redo and the blank artist forum will go on. Do you still want to work on this or keep it for when the new leader blanks are approved? 03:56, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

I still want to do this alt, though i'd like to stop work on it until the new blanks are ready for use. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:57, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Pose is from a reference, I can show it if need be. <span style="">20:10 Wed Jan 2

Sun these are absolutely astounding! Could you add either a tag or bell to the collar? There’s usually one. :) 20:16, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

Soooo cute! Can you move the collar a little bit down the neck? It kinda looks like it's choking them right now.. ^^' Also, the forearm closest to us looks overly thick. 23:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

woah!! love everyhting on this charart, i cant wait to see the next one. Starclanwilldarkme2 (talk) 00:16, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing, Sun! Could you possibly make that <-- front leg a bit longer to match the length of the other? It seems a bit shorter. 03:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the lineart on the hind paws just a bit? 03:56, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

The front paw facing us feels a bit too chubby compared to the rest of the legs. Also, while I do understand what you're going for with the lil fatty fluff on the haunch to define the tummy, it looks a bit off. Plump cats don't really have their fat protruding past their haunch, and with them laying down like this, the fat would go lower to touch the ground bc of gravity. These are super cute ;; I adore the toe beans so so much!! —​​​​

Could be my personal preferences, but could you make the long haired's fur less.. spiky and give it more variation?

Boulder (Alt A) ~ CBA
eh

I'm aware there's waste, btw

Is this going by the design on the warrior alt/rogue alt or? 08:45, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

I kept the elder's style in mind, and hadn't thought about the other two designs. To my knowledge none of them have been approved, but I can redo the stripes to match either if needed.

I don't think it needs changed since both were withdrawn, this is really good. I was primarily curious. Could you smooth the booty shading and add a little to the stomach? 11:34, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm per the TUG image, could you add tiny whiteish flares going up from the eyes? They kinda go around the stripes; just tweaked the elder to add one of those as well

Could you also define the facial shading a bit? This is very nice! 17:06, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Actually define the shading everywhere- I'm not seeing any though it may be my tablet.Potato Flakin (talk) 18:50, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks Vec! Also Spooky, I'm not sure if I did the white flares right

lmao did you forget to fix it or something cuz there's still waste on the very back leg. also make the shading more visible on that same back leg. also smooth out the shading on the chest, looks a little rough 05:13, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reference to the waste Burnt mentioned.Potato Flakin (talk) 05:22, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded im dumb

Define the shading Malina457 (talk) 17:00, January 6, 2019 (UTC)Malina

I think the shading's define enough, honestly. ​

CBA, then? 15:55, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Tribe of Endless Hunting Blanks ~ For Approval
Alrighty, I'm all freshened up and ready for these. ^^ 21:53, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Do you think you can enlarge it? 21:54, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, I forgot to mention I was planning on doing that. ^^' 21:56, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups How's this size wise? 03:25, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Great! Do you think you could add a mouth? 04:44, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you possibly make the fur taper out a little bit more on the long haired blank, specifically talking about the 3 hairs on the cheeks. Also idk if its just me, but I feel like the front leg in the back is visibly thinner than the front front leg 05:09, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

I love these. Can you give the short-hair a cheek, since the long-hair already has one? :D 18:34, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 20:03, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Back at it again with some redlines for you-- —​​​​​

Reups Thanks! Much appreciated. 02:35, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Push the neck forward a bit. Right now the cat would be straining its neck very hard. Also shrink the length of the leg on the ground, it's too big.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:07, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the neck is fine. It doesn't look like the cat is straining since it's just looking up. 15:29, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

The short-haired far front leg looks a bit too chubby at the bottom. try making the paw angle more.. sharp?

15:32, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

The neck is fine. My own cats have strained their neck far worse than this LOL —​​​

Reups 21:31, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

They are really coming along! The short-hair's chest looks a bit pointy. xD 03:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reups lol  17:45, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

can you maybe add some fluff to the neck? also the front leg thats furtherest away from us looks a bit too thick. (it's especially prominent on the shorthair.) love how they're looking like they're about to jump at a fly tho LUL 18:34, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm maybe do the same thing you’d done to the shorthaired’s chest to the long one in terms of general shape - it seems a little more pointy/angled than the other. I also think the shorthaired haunch is a little big, it hits the same points the long one does, but it shouldn’t go as far because the long one has fur making it go out further

Windstar (Alt. Es) ~ CBA


02:47, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think some of the eye colour leaked out onto the fur? The left eye 03:22, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her eyes are yellow and these are gray. Mind fixing that?Potato Flakin (talk) 03:54, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little bit on the chest, head, and belly? 14:13, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

19:02, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the neck just a bit? It's so nice to see how you've improved! ^^ 00:14, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded aw, thanks so much vec!

15:59, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:56, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Graystripe (alt A) - CBA
said once that id come back in my graduation year and how does time fly so fast. also i know it looks terrible, ill smooth out the shading in my next upload 05:55, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little more.Potato Flakin (talk) 13:31, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart at the top of the < back leg

reup. not sure if i fixed the leaking, i tried tho 12:06, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you extend the haunch shading some? 13:30, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

uploaded. think i fixed it. 14:08, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:00, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (Alt Ro) ~ CBA
20:57, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is cute, can you smooth the facial shading? 13:31, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the leg shading? Malina457 (talk) 16:58, January 6, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Reups 20:40, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? lovely shading btws

Rain (TB) ~ For Approval
喔你們好

Nice. Smooth out the belly shading a bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:19, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I really love this!!! But, I am a bit confused on the light source here. It seems to be coming from an angle behind and above the cat, but the tail shading does not correlate with the rest of the shading in that case. 02:58, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail Malina457 (talk) 04:13, January 7, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Squirrelflight (A Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I know the shading on the haunch needs fixed so please don't comment on it. 14:19, January 7, 2019 (UTC) White looks a little cream.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:37, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Windstar (Alt. Lo) ~ For Approval
All colors from other images. Comments? 23:11, January 7, 2019 (UTC) Define the tail shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:39, January 7, 2019 (UTC)