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Tigerclaw's Fury/Cliffnotes ~ Silver Nomination
I think this article is ready to be graded silver. Comments? ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  03:02, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

This looks really good :D Nothing to change stands out to me, but just double check for those sneaky grammar/spelling errors. They can slip by the best of us :) 15:49, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Alright, thank you. ^^ ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  05:59, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

pokety poke 01:24, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Only thing I can see is the 3rd-last line under chapter 10 for awkward tenses (fear me I am the tense nitpicker of the century) 13:28, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure if they're still working on this, so I fixed the tense (hopefully :P) 02:31, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

~poke~ 02:25, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't think Pinely's still working on this. Bird, would you like to take over, since you already fixed the tense? Tbh, I think some of the chapters could be expanded a bit.

Sure I'd be happy too! I'll start working on that this weekend. 12:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

In the next two weeks, I have about 10-12 tests I have to take, so I won't be able to work on this until afterwards. I'm sorry, but those take priority and I'll try my best to get to this after. 03:48, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Mapleshade's Vengeance/Chapter 1 ~ Silver Nomination
[wipes off sweat] comments? I worked damn hard on this. 09:13, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

There is a bullet point error in the characters list and you should check the placement of some commas in the 1st and 3rd paragraphs. Also, in the infobox, for chronology (the bottom bit of the infobox) you can link to Chapter 2 even though it's a redlink right now. That's all I see at the moment, nice work Fox :) 13:09, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Updated could you fix the chapters template for me? It's not really working, therefore I can't do the preceded thing either. 13:31, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

There you go 00:55, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

The overall phrasing of the article feels a bit choppy, the comma placement in particular. Try reading the whole article out loud to yourself so you can get a feel of how it sounds and then just change it so that it flows better (I'll point out specifics that need it most if you want) 06:46, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There were many errors too, I'm not sure if I fixed everything 10:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

I went through and fixed the comma placement and the flow in a few spots, but in general it still feels awkwardly phrased and the comma placement is still iffy. 02:47, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I fixed it 06:44, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Check the spelling/grammar again, and then this should be good! 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Updated 05:05, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Join
May I join? I can see there are a lot of pages that need to be made/finished and I know I can help with that. 06:27, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, welcome to to the project! Here are the guidelines and here is some more information on the chapter subpages if you need it. 13:00, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! 03:00, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Fire and Ice/Chapter 22 ~ Silver Nomination
Boy I hope this goes well. How many silver nominations can we do at a time? I can't find anything in the guidelines about that. 03:00, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

I don't believe there is a limit. I mean we need as many articles to silver as we can get, so... Anyway check for spelling, and remember to not directly quote from the book in the summary (i.e. dialogue). Otherwise, this looks quite good! 03:46, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Updated. 04:57, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Dovewing's Silence/Cliffnotes ~ Silver Nomination
Wow that was fun. I'm going to give it another crack with a different book. 06:58, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

This looks pretty good, just spotted a few grammatical errors. I haven't read this one, so someone who has should check it for content. 04:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Join?
I'd like to join this project, please, if you will have me 07:24, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Of course, I'll add you in right now! Here are the guidelines to read through and here is a chapter subpage tutorial if you wish to look at that as well. Welcome to PB! 04:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudstar's Journey/Cliffnotes ~ Silver Nomination
Finally done. Comments? 06:18, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Same as above 04:36, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Join?
holla — Sun Apr 19 04:14

Welcome to PB! Here are the guidelines and here is a chapter subpage tutorial to get you started. 04:19, April 19, 2015 (UTC)