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Nettle (ES) - CBA
I was so lazy on this haha... 01:22, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the legs? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:40, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

expand it more 00:07, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:15, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

add shading to the ears 05:01, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Yes, sorry! I'll be able to reupload it later today. 15:42, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:30, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading to the chest? :3

the pupluls are gray the need to be black (I did not read POS so if hes blind just ignore this comment) Belllastar (talk) 03:04, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:46, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

define the facial shading

Reuploaded 17:39, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Comments befoer approval? 19:26, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Dusk Nose (Kit) ~ CBA
My first kit and tortoiseshell! :D With the tortoiseshell and white debate going on, I gave her a creamy chest instead of white. I hope that's okay with the standards. I'm somewhat proud of this, but it definitely needs some sort of improvement. Anyways, enough with the talking and comment away! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:56, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Add some orange like her description says so. This is nice!--Dewsplash (talk) 02:02, November 6, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 02:02, Novembet, 6, 2015

She shouldn't have a creamy chest. She's only black and orange. 03:45, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the darker areas? It's kinda hard to decipher the black from the shading. 03:47 Fri Nov 6

Reuploaded Thanks Dew! I added orange, dulled down the pale chest and defined the shading. Hopefully this looks better. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 05:59, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the black and saturate the orange? Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:25, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened the base color and slightly saturated the orange. Does this look better? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:27, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Saturate the orange more? Since she's a specifically orange-and-black tortie, I feel like those colors should be pretty distinct. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:06, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

She shouldn't have any brown on her, if that's what I'm seeing. She's just specifically black and orange. 14:32, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the delay >< I made the pale chest gray and I saturated the orange some more. Is that ok? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 04:42, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, she shouldn't have gray at all. Please remove it. 13:22, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I replaced the gray chest with a pale orange. Is that ok? If not, I can remove it. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:38, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

i dont see why not, its still orange. define the shading a bit more. 13:44, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened it and sharpened it slightly. Does that look better? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:56, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

She still looks kinda gray. Can you try making her more brown? 23:27, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please clarify that? Why does she need to have any brown on her? She was specifically called orange and black. I was told to remove it a while ago. O.o ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:25, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

She didn't say add brown. She said make it more brown, as in a brown tint or shade on the color wheel, not full on brown.

Reuploaded I'm still not sure why I have to make her browner, but I shifted the base color towards the brown side a little more. I hope that looks ok. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:07, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

there's a weird braclet-like line above her paw --Belllastar (talk) 03:07, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on ==> that paw please. Looking good

Reuploaded Fox: I'd love to do that, but I lost the file because somehow GIMP didn't save itself, also, the paw is meant to be black. But thank you ^^, Belllastar: I assume this is what you meant? Anyway, finally reuploaded. How's this? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:10, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Well they technically doesn't mean you lost the file in general. you can still find it. Can you define the shading please? 17:18, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the lack of uploads >< I kinda forgot about this little guy lately. Anyway, I added a new layer of shading to define it. Also, I only have the very old version of this file, which was basically redone. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:36, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 19:25, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Windstar (ES) ~ CBA
I havent made a charart in over a year, so please go easy if i did something wrong.-- 02:58, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. Could you define the neck and facial shading slightly? 03:10, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:10, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes are smudged a bit on the StarClan image.. and tbh I think the stripes are the tiniest bit lighter. Also, did you add the texture to the stripes, because I can't tell.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Yep, theres texture. 14:31, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

o= did you change anything, the stripes are still th dark and the textures nerly invisable Belllastar (talk) 03:14, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I'm going to please ask you to use proper grammar. And it looks like she did change something - the stripes are lighter and I can see the texture. However, I do think the shading could be defined a tad more. 14:29, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

textures not that defined on the others anyway. 17:38, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 03:07, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Icy, you gave her a comment to do... that contradicts the fact that there's still an outstanding comment. o.o and tbh it could be defined on the neck and the ears, specifically.

I know. I disregarded it because I thought it wasn't needed anymore. 14:13, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:37, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? Beautiful image

Dangling Leaf (K) ~ CBA
Texture on kits is the bane of my existence. 3:31 Mon Nov 9

could you add more stripes on the tail? 07:25, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

doesnt need more stripes, but they could be defined a bit. 11:20, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Added another stripe and defined all of them. 15:57 Mon Nov 9

Can you lighten or tweak the base? All I see is pitch-black. There's no lineart, no texture, nothing.

Re-ups 13:38 Tue Nov 10

Alright, now can you lighten the shading a tiny bit as well? I'm still seeing random blobs of pitch-black in places, but mainly the neck and --> side of the cat.

Re-uploaded Is that good, or should it be lighter? 17:49 Tue Nov 10

Nope! The only thing left that I can see that might need to be done is the nose pink. I think most black cats have either super dark or black noses. Or at least that's what I was informed of.

Re-uploaded 18:03 Tue Nov 10

define the tail shading

Re-uploaded 14:01 Fri Nov 13

CBA?

Harepounce (star) ~ For Approval
Harepounce for President  04:54, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Remove or thin out the facial shading <== there 11:15, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 15:07, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the tail shading just a bit. 20:31 Mon Nov 9

Shading is leaking on the ear. 15:01, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think you forget to fill in the nose. If you did fill it in just disregard this comment. 18:04 Tue Nov 10

It is filled. Anyway, she looks slightly cross-eyed.

I dont see how she does... She is supposed to look bottom right. 00:11, November 11, 2015 (UTC) re-up 15:47, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Also, maybe fix the light source and shading on the tail too, it doesn't look like it matches with the rest of the image. 15:37, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

This is the same exact light source as Houndstar's starclan image, so the shading is fine. It does match with the rest of the image. 19:31, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

at least thin out the bottom side of the tail shading because i covers up the whole tail and confuses others

Hollypelt (StarClan) ~ CBA
My first Charart!!! It actully doesnt look bad. Im not In the PCA, can I still post this? 18:41, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, even if you aren't part of PCA, you can still contribute. Nice job, define shading? Also, do you think you could make her a little lighter of black? I know she's black but it's extremely difficult to see her lineart also, please define the ear pink? 00:22, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Acctully, everything is fine, I can see the earpink and the lineart. If you colourpick the base from here it matches the warrior. There are highlights on both images. 01:23, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I actually cannot make out the lineart on the back half. Please add some more highlights or dull down the base 01:45, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I thought there's an image to match

Yes, the base cannot be changed, it has to match the warrior. 1:55 Tue Nov 10

I think the nosepink needs to be black. I could be wrong, though.

Warriors don't have nosepink, so it doesn't matter. 13:41 Tue Nov 10

..All the colors macth the warrior. They both have highlights, and i'll get to the nse as soon as i get home- but one question- is it pure lack or like- very dark gray? 15:00, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest using a very, very dark gray. 15:49, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Use the color from the warrior. For the nose, I suggest the same color as the earpink. 17:50 Tue Nov 10

Again, black cats normally have darker colored noses- it wouldn't always be the same color as the ear pink. In fact, it probably shouldn't be.

Reuploaded Fixed the nose. Still on the edge about the pelt color. 13:46, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

The pelt color has to be #0e0e0e, as that is the base color on the warrior. If it is not at least similar to that it won't match. 14:44 Wed Nov 11

its the same, i added highlights to the starclan as you did the warrior. 14:47, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Then the pelt color should be fine. 18:09 Wed Nov 11

I'm going to promote you into an apprentice - you know what you're doing

sorry for the lack of comments, CBA?

Snail Shell (Ki) - CBA
tiny baby

So adorbs. ^^ the tail shading is contradicting the light source. Amazing job! 05:48, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

I just used this source on Apple Blossom, and absolutely no one had an issue. All of my kit images use this source as well (because I don't like the other one that others have used), and the tail shading is exactly the same. imo, it's fine.

It doesn't hurt to erase a couple pixels and draw a couple more on the other side of the tail? I mean it wouldn't hurt to change it if it bugs someone... that's just me though. I know how irritating the kit blank is

I never said that it would hurt. This is literally the exact same source, so I don't see any reason why I should change it. Plus, there are other kit images (including ones made just recently) that have the exact same source that I do.

Yeah, I think the light source is fine. 1:49 Thu Nov 12

CBA?

Sorry cloudy but I think the shading needs to be smoothed out some more. 17:20, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Technically didn't smooth it out, but I did something else instead.

I think that means re-uploaded. So re-CBA?

Clover (AFD) ~ CBA
she make Charart with own blank :v <span style="">12:55 Wed Nov 11

Can you define the "moustache"? 01:28, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the texture just a tiny bit. 14:43, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

i don't think that's texture

re-uploaded nah it's not texture; just shading <span style="">13:15 Sat Nov 14

CBA goes to this beautiful image she made with her own blank :v

Tiny Branch (Star) ~ CBA
Poor Kitty 20:34, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

i dont think hes been cited in starclan? i dont have the book, so i cant double check. 14:04, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

kate confirmed it

Could you define the ear pink a little bit? It looks very purple and undefined. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:23, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uzps 15:04, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit?

Re-ups 16:03, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Sparrow Fur (Alt ES) ~ CBA
Redone with the Early Settler blank. All colors from my orginal alt rogue. Lighter texture will be redone. 22:12, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? I can barely see anything under it. 08:14, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 14:26, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 11:05, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Cow(R) - For Approval
Alright, so unless it says in the books she was named after the apperance of a cow, I'm giving her the apperance of my cat since the last time I did that, the cat's description was magically changed by an author later on, so let's try this pattern again. The eyes are also a warmer green color but if they look too yellow I can tweak them a bit. But yeah, as always, if something's outta place then just tell me! I had fun with this  01:33, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her side just a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 04:42, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge (i assume thats what you did, judging by how it looks) the shading a lot more. I can /see/ the smudge marks... 10:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't smudge on Sai. She has fur texture  04:53, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Either way, I can see strange markings on the main body where I think the shading is meant to be. 13:42, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Leaf (DTC) (es) ~ For Approval


Smooth out the shading on the body and tail, but leave the white spots alone. 02:40, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Christ black cats are hard

there shouldnt be any bright spot on the underbelly where the bright white is, cus its behind the leg 13:25, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Is this what you meant?

Can you give a bit of depth to the eyes? They look kinda flat.

Re-uploaded

Jackdaw's Cry (ES) - For Approval
Jackdaw's Cry my bab

First ever textured cat yo 04:10, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him more. --Dewsplash (talk) 04:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

there's a strange dorsal-stripe like stripe

Re-ups I accidentally forgot his nicked ear so i added that. Yes i see the weird pixel on it i'll fix that. Also, i didn't add stripes on him...? 05:14, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Again, i cleaned everything up so it should look better now 05:14, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Crop the image

Reups 05:35, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Make the texture flow more with the fur. 12:32, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

the light on -> that leg shouldnt be as it is, it contradicts the light source. and the shading needs to be blurred or something, 17:49, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

I don't have light on the > leg.... 22:36, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and smooth out the texture, and I'm not sure if you got what Bramble shade, but the texture does need to flow more. I'm not repeating comments, I just didn't know if you got what she said. 03:06, November 14, 2015 (UTC)\

Reups  i just redid the texture completely, i wasn't very happy with it either. 03:57, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

It still needs to flow with the fur more. And please upload your images under Jackdaw's Cry.es.png. I renamed this for you, but in the future please remember to upload it under the same file name you originally uploaded it as. I believe you got this warning with Daisytoe as well. 09:35, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't really know WHAT to name it because of the apostrophe, so I just went for what I assumed it to be. Also, I believe I am consistently naming them now... 19:01, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

it kinda looks like he's got a lazy eye 19:42, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Micah (MC) ~ CBA
omfg my first medicine cat :D 16:06, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

stripes could stand to be smudged a tad. 16:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

reups 23:34, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

try giving the herbs some shading or at least put different tones of colors on it - it looks a tad flat. (You definitely did him justice - I like him so much :D) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:36, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reups they do have shading, but i just gave them some light tone 13:19, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:46, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the herbs still seriously look flat. I think you should give them more tones of colors

Tbh not all leaves are different colors, and I gave them a light tone and a shading tone, I cannot define it any more 15:56, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

you can change it... i still think it looks really flat, but whatever.

maybe lighten up the base herb colour so the shading stands out more. 12:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

reups im not touching the herbs anymore 14:52, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 20:30, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Dew Petal (Ki) ~ For Approval
Why was this weird just now

if its texture on the silver part of the head, it needs to be smudged more because they look like stripes. ` 17:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading on the face could be defined a tad. Beautiful image! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:22, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Mistpelt (Star) - For Approval
tired lil elder cat <span style="">03:50 Fri Nov 13

sharpen and expand the shading

I don't think she should sharpen it but she could definitely blur it and expand it a lot. 07:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's like a dot in the far lower left corner? 13:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">02:35 Sat Nov 14

expand the shading everywhere, especially on the tail. Define the light on the legs.

Blue Whisker (Alt. Q) ~ For Approval
I'll define the shading on the next upload. 19:55, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the pale part of the belly, and did you forget the earpink? 20:04, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out and expand the shading more, and smudge all the markings 20:05, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. No, I didn't forget the earpink, but I went ahead and defined it. Also redid the shading. 20:18, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more, and define the shading on her front half. What program are you using? 23:33, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Is the earpink gray? The ears just look like they're part of the pale parts. Also define the shading depth a little. 00:58, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Icebreeze, yes, the earpink is gray; in the manga, they seem to be the same/similar color as he marking, though I'll make it more pink if anyone says to. @Snowdapple, I use Gimp. 01:45, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Try and make it more pink, gray cats usually don't have earpink that gray. 03:05, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:20, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

What setting do you have the blur tool on? I'd suggest using the full on blur tool and not one of the lowered opacity ones. 15:57, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:32, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks over blurred

Define shading everywhere

Fern Leaf (Alt ES) ~ CBA
*The wind is howling. (an imaginary point to who guesses which game character i modelled her pattern off) 21:00, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

No. Also, can you define the shading on the gray a tiny bit? I can see it on the white, but it almost vanishes when it reaches the gray.

Heh, nice Undertale reference. It could just be my screen, but maybe define the earpink in the ear closest to us a little more? I can't really see it. 21:27, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you possibly smudge all of the hearts just a tiny bit so they flow with the fur some more? 23:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded yes 05:51, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

No comments before approval? 23:54, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Riverstar (ES) - For Approval
I...I hate this. I think I'm just gonna redo the shading 800 times. 02:38, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

There's a white pixel near the tip of his tail. Lovely work! 03:09, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, this is good! The shading's leaking on the back leg furthest away from us. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:31, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little at the top of foreleg farthest from us, near the chest. 13:01, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: What even is this. And thank you guys for the lovely comments. Should I blur the haunch shading more and lighten the chest?

I can still see a white pixel at the top of the tail, and I think the shading is leaking by the chest in between the two front legs, and on the back leg farthest from us, possibly switch the shading so its on ==> that side of the leg, while the light is on <== that side? I can also see you missed a tiny bit of waste in between the two front legs 15:59, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

could you smudge the earpink a little more? boo-e-ti-ful <span style="">20:07 Sat Nov 14

Re-uploaded: Changed the shading to look more like Gray Wing's. 22:56, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Heronwing (Star) - Declined
Guess who finally became friends with GIMP. 02:42, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! Define the earpink a little. Also, smooth out the chest shading. 13:06, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:28, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur/smudge the shading overall some more? Amazing job ^^ 16:00, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you! Hopefully the changes are visible enough, I can blur it some more if I need to. 16:43, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more on the main body and chest. Looks great :) <span style="">20:06 Sat Nov 14

Re-uploaded 19:33, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

This was reserved 8 hours after posting. Declined. 19:49, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Alder (ES) ~ For Approval
<span style="">01:14, 15, 11, 2015

Define the shape and flow of the shading. 07:10, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

the shading appears to be leaking, at least apparently. It could be the white thou

The markings on the kit aren't smudged or blurred or stylized or anything... It's just a smaller flecked brush.

Dust Muzzle (ES) - For Approval
I totally forgot I had this file saved under the wrong name and just uploaded it as was without changing the name. :P Sorry to ask, but could someone fix that for me? Anyway, I'm really happy with this, trying to match the kit was definitely interesting. ^^ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:24, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

define the chest shading

Eagle Feather (ES) ~ For Approval
Not a fan of that shading - I'll definitely smooth it on out on the next upload 13:58, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the hind legs a little? Lovely! <span style="">23:02 Sun Nov 15

Robinwing (TC) (Star) - For Approval
01:55, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the main body. Looking nice. I'll promote you into an apprentice

Smoothen shading everywhere :)

Owl Song (Q)- For Evaluation


My first character art. Give as much critique as possible. Jaysnow (talk) 02:16, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

smudge or blur the patches more, expand and blur the shading quite a bit.

Will do. Thanks. Jaysnow (talk) 02:25, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and blur the earpink, as well as add some shading to them 02:30, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'm going to change her to short haired, because that's how Kate imagines her... Jaysnow (talk) 08:07, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to her face, it looks slightly flat. Also, define shading on her legs

Mud Paws (ES) ~ For Approval
I spent way too much time on this and I still hate it.

Re-upload: Somehow forgot to add earpink, haha

How did you even do this... *.* define the facial shading a bit, please