Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Birdy - For Approval
Yep, I finally did her. Constructive criticism is welcome, and remember, if I don't respond right away, even for a week, DON'T remove. G B 57 17:27, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There are dark gray dots inside of the middle patch, and I can't see any shading. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:40, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks... circular. -- Rain whisker 09 23:41, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

GB, I don’t know how much allowance I can give you… the image can’t just remain here while others are declined when they aren’t worked on in a week. It isn’t fair to others. I’ll give you two weeks at the most; after that I don’t think it can stay up any more if you haven’t worked on it. -- Bramble -san  21:04, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

I agree: two weeks is fair because he can only get on every other week. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:04, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Back. God, I hate life when it makes you busy. Anyway, I'll get on this before the weekend ends, but I have other stuff I need to catch up on, as well. G B 57 15:01, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Better? I blurred the darker spots in. G B 57 15:45, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, that's better. The ear pink needs to be slightly less circular though (I know it's hard with the kits but make it a bit taller) and a less purpley colour. Then darken all the shading. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:02, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

I forgot to do the ear pink. I'll get to it this weekend. Ugh, sorry I'm gone so often. And thanks to my dad's new stupid work schedule, it's going to get slightly worse. Grrr. G B 57 02:45, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry to hear that, Grocery :(. On the image: it's great, but could you darken the eyes a bit? They are so light I can't really tell what color they are. Sparrowsong 00:29, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I've improved her. How is she? G B 57 21:56, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Great! I don't see anything wrong :D. You did a pretty nice job. Sparrowsong 18:31, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink needs to be less circular and the shading needs to be darkened. --Hallow's Eve 09 21:50, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Blackclaw. Also, maybe try blurring the stomach-patch just a tad more. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 23:48, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

I'll do the patch, but the ear pink has already been made less circular. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

The only thing I see wrong is that darker shading is needed. That's all. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 22:59, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry it's taking so long, guys, but I won't be able to get to this for another week. Believe me, I'll do this when I get the chance. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 03:23, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Alright, re-uploaded. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 16:26, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The white part of the pelt needs shading. Once you do that, this should be ready. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 16:33, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I suggest that you use burn highlights on 12(maybe) on the white parts of her body. Thats what I do and it works really well.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:01, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Icewhisker- For Approval
*Shrugs* A minor character. Comments? <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 18:08, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

The thing that immediately strikes me is that it needs shading!!! Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:02, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 20:10, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading, and there's a bit of burred linart on his forehead. Very good though!  HA WK FI RE98  21:18, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks :) I'll go fix the lineart and shading <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 21:58, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 22:10, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Needs it's shading thickened immensely and blended. Ear pink could be toned down, but it mostly needs blurred some. ^^--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:36, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 21:09, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Better, but go back, it looks like you blurred the line art or added black marks.Minnowclaw 12:12, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be more... intense Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 21:10, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the lineart. But Sandy, i don't get what you mean by "intense" <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 19:01, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not Sandy, but I think she meant that it needs to be darker. (Sandy corect me if I'm wrong.)Minnowclaw 14:14, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Well yes, that is kind of what I mean. It needs to be not just darker but a little thicker and blur it really well so it actually looks like shadows on his pelt. Some good examples of how the shading needs to look are Shadepelt and Rushtail's image which is currently up for approval. (I can't think of any more off the top of my head, sorry) It's not exactly just darker; it needs to look like a part of the pelt. I really hope that made some sense. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:05, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Done. I tried to fix it... <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 13:30, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

There should be more shading on the legs, and you might want to add a tiny highlight to the top of the herbs. -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 00:24, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Try blurring the shading, and also, finish coloring in the far ear. After that, and doing what the above comments say, I'd think you're good to go. =) -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 23:48, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

This has been up for a week now. Morningleaf please work on this or it will be declinded and we can't have something that is sooooo good and close to being done go to waste.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 01:48, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry! I have, like lots of other ppl, been buried alive in homework. I'll go work on it now. <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 19:53, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? I added shading to the legs, fixed the ear, and blurred the shading more. Can someone please tell me how to do highlights? I don't know. <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 20:11, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

You can add highlights with the doged tool.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 23:12, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks :) I added the highlight. Better? <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 00:05, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot; right now it's very bumpy and uneven. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Teal">Talk♦<font color="2A417D">Contribs 12:29, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:32, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

I'm really sorry. I'll get to it this weekend. I've been sick. Sorry. <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 00:56, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

kk, I blended the shading. Anything else? <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 01:19, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

The shading's better now. :) Just make the ear pink more salmon-colored rather than light pink, and I'd be glad to approve this. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 01:22, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the ear pink :) <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 19:05, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  03:19, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For approval


(M) - Not much to say about these. First blank I've made where you can see both sides of the face and such, and probably the last blank I'll do for a long time. Will make a colored version over the weekend. (Maybe.) Constructments? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:51, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Very cute. But their bellies and legs look.. weird. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:Orange; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Black;"> Ghostfire Happy Halloween! 23:44, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

A few things though...What i think could be improved  How I would do it..... Feel free to remove this or disregard it if i'm wrong, but its lineart looks a bit odd only in this area. Summary of it: The arm has odd, unnecicary lines, the showing hind leg goes a bit up, or thick, the stomach area is oddly shaped, and the eye is a bit odd... But its fabulous in the rest.-- ♥Sha de♥ <font color="#d8bfd8">Meow/<font color="#008000">Prey 00:21, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg looks a little disproportionate--AutumnSky 02:26, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

I made a example and changed up the lineart a little bit. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:Orange; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Black;"> Ghostfire Happy Halloween! 15:44, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just to let everyone know, I'm still working on these. Please don't decline. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:18, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

The arm showing looks either too thin or too long, and the showing hind looks to high or thick.<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:maroon;">♥Shad <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Aquamarine;background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aquamarine;">owed <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Yellow;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">heart♥ 01:09, November 3, 2009 (UTC) I really wanna see these improved, so if you need help re-lining them, i made this. And a colored version of my cat, speedy.The colored version looks terrible because i didnt shade it. Dont criticize it...<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:maroon;">♥Shad <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Aquamarine;background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aquamarine;">owed <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Yellow;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">heart♥ 22:03, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploded. What else do I need to fix? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:44, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

This might sound weird... but the stomachs look like kangaroos in that they have a kind of pouch... I think it's the way the lineart seems to overlap. Also, there are a lot of little lines that are kind of unecessary and will make colouring difficult. Try and simplify them a little without losing too much important detail. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 23:01, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

I think it would be easier to add ear pink if the line in the ear that is closest to us was taken out, but thats just my opinion. --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 02:36, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Well, now I'm sick. Nothing like H1N1 or anything, but my sinuses are all congested. D: Anyways, Snady could you be more specic on the lines that can be taken out and how they look like kangaroos? As for Spottedwing, I was wondering about that. While it makes blurring difficult, the leader blanks have the same kind of lines and they help define where to place the ear pink... what do you guys think? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:48, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with you, Moss. Since the leader blanks are like that as well...I personally like the ears as they are, it helps define them better, as you said. Also, I hope you feel better soon! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:51, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Jus forget my comment; they don't look like it anymore. I think my computer was being funny about showing image updates but it seems to be fixed now. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:24, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I think Icethroat is right: keep the lines as it defines the ear shape more. There are some smaller lines such as on the chest that make the image hard to colour though as they get blurred when blurring shading. They also look very... rough so maybe you could try and simplify some of the busier areas of the blanks somewhat - they don't have to be complicated to look good (look at the warrior blanks) and the object is to make them easy to colour. Also, the paw that is lifted, the elbow looks floppy like it has no bone in it. The pose is great though =) These are the best kittypet blanks I think I've seen Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 21:32, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Fixed fur and got rid of the gray lines on the edges. As for the elbows, I'm not sure how to fix them; any ideas? Just make them pointer? Also, I'm afraid to mess with the fur due to the fact that it took me forever to get it right. Plus, the fur's like my loner blanks, so I'm trying to keep to that style. Anyways, what can I fix? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:22, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Moss, I'm not sure if I can call you tonight, so I'll comment here. On the long-haired's tails, the fur is pointing the wrong direction. It should be falling, but not pointed backwards. Definetely getting better, though. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:09, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (W) for approval
Not much to say. comments? --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 02:39, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

You may want to blur the shading alot, and lighten the black just barely.-- ♥Sha de♥ <font color="#d8bfd8">Meow/<font color="#008000">Prey 13:28, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, blend the shading, and also, his eyes are green. Not blue. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:Orange; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Black;"> Ghostfire Happy Halloween! 13:45, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make the shading blured and bigger.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 14:55, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading and ear pink, but the reason why I didn't change the eye color is because his discribtion said blue and I don't remember reading that he had green. --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 20:17, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine now, but you need to make the shading thicker.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 12:47, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Done. What else? --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 21:44, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Nothing that I can see, good job Spottedwing.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 23:02, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

I have a few, if slightly picky things. Firstly, the shading could be thickened a little more as it's hugging the lineart very closely at present and could look more like shadows if it was slightly thicker. Secondly, there doesn't need to be shading on the top of the muzzle. The ear pink is also quite large and needs to be smaller for a black cat. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:36, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Darn, I can never see something like that :(-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:36, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Seriously Minnow, don't worry. I've lost track of the number of times i've put out the 24 hours and about 8 people have then flooded the image with improvements ^_^ Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 09:03, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy, that helpped a lot. <(^-^)> HUGS!-- <span style="font-family:Curlz Mt; color:orange; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">♥Halloweenclaw 20:52, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading. --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 22:33, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink still needs to be fixed, as Sandy said above. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Teal">Talk♦<font color="2A417D">Contribs 12:40, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the ear pink. --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 17:08, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

It's not that much fixed.-- <span style="font-family:Curlz Mt; color:orange; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">♥Halloweenclaw 17:58, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Ok hows this? --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 02:45, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

The color is better, you just need to blur it. (wow I'm typing this really fast and making a lot a of mistakes.)!!!!!!!!:) :) :) :)-- *Minn owc law*  15:38, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Blured the ear pink.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 18:06, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

It's much better now. I think it's ready.-- *Minn owc law*  18:51, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval in 24 hours? (Yay I said it!)-- *Minn owc law*  20:05, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the paws is very messy, and part of it is only lapping at the lineart. On the hind leg that we can see, the shading would be better if it was on the bottom of the entire leg. Also, the shading on the top of the head between the muzzle and ear could be thickened some, and, personal opinion, it would look better if there was some shading on the back of the tail (use the burn tool once or twice on our right half of the tail vertically, blur, and it should be fine). Other than that, this looks very good. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:33, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. <font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:43, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Just one more thing. On the right hind leg, there's an area that is a lighter gray than the rest of the body. Fix that, and I'd be glad to approve this. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 14:54, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Where exactly? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 01:23, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:51, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Comments??? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:39, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 15:12, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Kit-Mother Blanks ~ For Approval


How do you like my suckish artwork? xD Gawd, I need a tablet... The example is better than the blanks: <BR> Comment/Suggestios? (Suggestions OTHER than leaving the drawing to experts? xD)-- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:15, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Oh..my..staclan..THIS IS SO CUTE! I love the way she's staring at you like "I'm not fat!" The only thing I could say is that the head looks, a bit small-- ♥Sha de♥ <font color="#d8bfd8">Meow/<font color="#008000">Prey 15:18, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! :) I'll make the head a little bit bigger. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:26, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Heads are bigger by a tad. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:44, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

it look a bit odd..what is she doing? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 15:52, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know if Apprentices are allowed to critique, and I love the blanks, but there are a few spots that look a bit... out of place. XD The paw near the Kit-Mother's head looks a bit flat, and the tails could be a smidge wider, but that's all I see. (: <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Orange; background:Black; border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Shigura Mah Talk Page 21:53, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Shigura: Everyone's aloud to critique. That's part of the learning experience, being able to say what's wrong with a picture. :) Mumble: I agree with Shigura, the paw looks flat, and the tail could be a small bit wider. And also, the tail on the shorthair could maybe brought to the left a little bit, so the bottom of the lineart on the tail is at the same curve as the bottom lineart of the tail on the longhair, giving a curve that makes it more natural. Otherwise, great job, Mumble! Icethroat21 Enter at risk 22:18, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

She looks good, but the muzzle is a little thick, that shouldn't be too hard, methinks. You put queen blanks up a while ago, right? You've really improved ^^.-- Darkhallows 07:34, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

The neck looks fat.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 12:46, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darkhollows: Yes, I did. :) I think I tryed a freindly blanks war with melon! xD Thank you! ^-^<BR> Bramble: She's laying down while looking at you. :P Yeah, not very well-thought-out position...<BR> Everyone who offered suggestions: I'll do that. How would I make the paw look less flat? -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 18:11, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe make the paw more curved, like she's trying to swat the air? <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Orange; background:Black; border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Shistar BOO! 18:14, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - The tip of the short haired looks pointy. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 11:42, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

I'll do all of those ASAP, but I'm unable to get on very often since school is eating up my free time. Please do not delete these. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 21:44, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - XP I meant their tails looked pointy. I guess I forgot to type tails! Oops. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:42, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

lol. I've REUPLOADED the originals, and also have modified and saved two without paws so we can see which is better. I'll do the rouder tails with the next editing section, as well as making a new colored in example. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:35, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like the one without the paw better but, maybe you could change the position of the head a little.-- Ashstar My Clan 03:10, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like the one without the paw, but maybe make the neck a little thicker, especialy on the long haired one--Nightfall101 04:27, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I personally like the one with the paw, because the one without the paw looks kind of weird, like the cat's paw was cut off or something. But that's just my opinion. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:57, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

kk. I sorta do too. Any other comments before I edit again? -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 16:16, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - First, the forelegs are pointing different directions; fix that. Also, maybe you could make the long-haired's leg look furrier? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:12, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

I'll do the furry leg and non-pointy tail ASAP, but I don't know what you mean by the forlegs look like they're pointing in different dirrections. Can you please clarify? -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 20:36, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Screech of Angry Owl (To-Be) - For Approval
...*fidgets* Sorry, Bracken! here is the brother of Pebble. how is he? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Gray;">Hallow's Eve 09 02:09, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, but this is very dark and I can't see much, can you lighten it up a bit?-- <span style="font-family:Curlz Mt; color:orange; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">♥Halloweenclaw 13:24, October 31, 2009 (UTC)


 * 3 s;okay...like Minnow said, he IS a bit too dark so, I suggest you probably start out as a dark gray'ish coulour, then add shading 'till it looks black :3--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> ☆Pebble☆ X3 21:15, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Isn't he supposed to be black? But I'll lighten it anyway. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Gray;">Hallow's Eve 09 23:34, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Yes he is black, but if it's too dark, we can't see and he might as well be purple.-- *Minn owc law*  02:34, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better, or should I lighten it more? I also blurred some of the shading and thinned it cause I thought it was too thick. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 17:33, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

It's still too thick on the back and belly.-- *Minn owc law*  22:08, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Uploaded Better? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:00, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

The black is so dark that I can't see the lineart. Try running him over once or twice with the dodge tool to lighten the color. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 14:51, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

I already did that before, but I'll do it again. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 02:34, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Uploaded I lightened the color, but I don't know if it's still hard to see the lineart. On my com it looks fine. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:59, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I can sort of see the lineart, but I really like the way your eye looks. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:14, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Whitewing (Q)- For Approval
--My first charart. I did the best I could. Comments =) <font color="red" style="background:Black">Darkmoon25'

She is completely white. Don't worry, when I started making charart, I would be that with white cats too. You need to make it a light gray, because if it's totally white, then shading won't work. Do you know how to shade? Because if not I could teach you.-- <span style="font-family:Curlz Mt; color:orange; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">♥Halloweenclaw 13:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

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There's a few blurry sections of Lineart, and the shading should probably be thickened a bit. I can't see anything. XD (But that might be just me) The ear pink should be blurred out, and in a triangle shape. But don't worry, it's pretty good for your first charart! :) Just a suggestion; If you already know this, i'm very, very sorry. But you should go to http://pixlr.com/editor and use that. Using that program you can use the blur tool to blur shading and ear pink (Be careful not to go over lineart, and if you do, just open up paint and go over the black lines with the pencil tool) and you can use the 'Burn' tool to darken parts, etc. Once again, I'm very sorry if you already knew about pixlr. =) <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Orange; background:Black; border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Shistar BOO! 15:16, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Shigura covered it all.-- *Minn owc law*  15:17, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the one cheek and behind the ear, it is lighter than the other spots. --<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Crimson;">Mosspath <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Cyan;background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> of <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Yellow;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Skyclan 15:29, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

For shading, use the burn tool. (if you already know this, ignore me), and run it over the back, hind leg, and other places that have shading. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 19:25, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

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Okay, the lines that were blurred are a bit too thick now. And there still isn't any shading. XD (I checked. XP) There should be a few white pixels in the eye, (Look at Ferncloud's eye to see how it should look) And the ear pink should still be more triangular and blurred along the outside. =) <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:White; background:Black; border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:White;"> Shistar Mai Talk Page! =) 17:22, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

There are only still some white parts near her face and her ear.-- *Minn owc law*  23:13, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

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(S) - Maybe it's me, but the eye looks turquoise. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:29, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

hmm... my main problem is that you've now made her so far off-white that she looks pale grey... =/ Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:40, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Make the shading darker also, and blur the ear pink slightly as it looks like it is now painted on. (ps. please sign with ~ so we can see the timestamp, thanks) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:35, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, pretty much what Sandy said. Also, to make her less pale gray, use the dodge tool at about size 70, and the brush that gets lighter out. (Please disregard if you knew this.)-- Mossy SC  22:33, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

re uploaded. I lightened her and darkened the shading. also changed eye color. finally i Blurred the ear pink. please approve this! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

I don't know, she still looks pale gray to me--Nightfall101 23:40, November 10, 2009 (UTC) I dont see anywhere she is pale grey. Except for the shading.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

(S) - I can tell you changed the eye, but maybe make it a darker green, like on her warrior image. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:18, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

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I have a few things and although I don't often do them, I've drawn you a diagram (yay!) to help show you what I mean.

Okay: the red circle shows where I don't think you need the shading as it wouldn't go around the whole lineart of the tail. The purple shows where you need to add shading, the blue shows where the lieart is blurred. You also need to blur all the shading into the pelt as it's quite messy. The background needs to be made transparent and the ear pink is too bright (I put a patch of the colour I would recommend next to the ear although there are other colours that can be used on white cats and look good) Hope this helps =) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:16, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

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Applefur - For Approval
Yay! Applekit comes back! But we still never know what happened to Marshkit. =( Anyway, here she is. I felt kind of bad cluttering up the page, but since Adderfang's in the "24-Hour-Stage", I thought you guys would be able to forgive me. =) Comments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:03, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is good! I know that it's about the same color as her kit version, but make the ear pink brighter, but not too bright.-- *Minn owc law*  21:23, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Oh, and the reason her color is a little bit different from her kit version, is because she gets a new description in The Fourth Apprentice. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:38, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

That's dum. I mean the new description not you. Make the ear pink have more color as now it looks pale.-- *Minn owc law*  22:04, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Honeyfur, but we're not making any TFA characters until the actual book comes out. You can put this up once TFA comes out, but for now this will have to be temporarily declined. -- Echoshriek <font color="Purple">Trick or treat! 23:44, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is to Minnowclaw: I am slightly ashamed to say that I let the fact that Applefur had a false description slide. I just thought it was the most likely, and thinking that we'd never see her again thought it didn't matter. Truth is, I've never seen anywhere that Applekit was a dark ginger she-cat. -- Bramble -san  00:00, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

What do we do now? I'm I in trouble?-- *Minn owc law*  00:11, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

You're not in trouble Minnow - it's my fault. I relied on the wiki page for her description. I have a plan though: 1. I'll redo her kit version so in co-insides with the accurate description. 2. I think the image is going to have to go to waste as I can't think of any other dark ginger kits... unless I can have the image back and try and do something with it? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:03, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Also, temporarily declined until TFA release (I'm glad I saw this because it's reminded me not to post Beetlewhisker yet!) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:02, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is taking up space. Back up for critquing. However, when it is approved and archived, we just don't put the image on the page until TFA comes out. Compromise... gotta love it. :) -- Bramble -san  22:48, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, Bramble! Yup, gotta love it. ^.^ For the image, the ear pink looks a bit odd being circular, and it's also gone outside of the ear. Try getting it back inside the ear, and more triangular-ish. Also, darken the shading on the chest and on top of the head some. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:52, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:41, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Much better, but now can you darken the flecks? I can barely see the mottled-ness. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:44, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Rippleclaw - For Approval
My first warrior and first tabby. I know it needs work so comments are welcome.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:22, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! This is awesome! :) Just blur the tabby markings a bit and he'll be good to go. Nice job :). -- Echoshriek <font color="Purple">Trick or treat! 23:46, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes don't look very tabby. Try making some of them Y shaped and more wavy so they don't look like lines. Also, blur all of the shading more.-- *Minn owc law*  00:12, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

I did not have to make y ones and this is good. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 05:54, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

You need to add some markings on the chest and some other places that don't have any. Also, I'd try and vary the markings a little (not necessarily y shapes but maybe some differences in length without it being in a pattern of all long down the side and all short in the middle) and lessen the number of stripes on the tail as it looks a bit crowded. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:02, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Okay I'll do that. Besides the chest which places don't have stripes? I put them just about everywhere else. -- Ashstar My Clan 20:33, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Brambleclaw14: Yes I no that they are don't need to be y's, but as Sandy said it's good to change them up a bit as they look like there in a pattern.-- *Minn owc law*  23:04, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I fixed the stripes and blurred them. I also blurred the shading more. Is this better? -- Ashstar My Clan 21:33, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and the shading.-- *Minn owc law*  14:30, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?-- Ashstar My Clan 22:18, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Comments?-- Ashstar My Clan 16:02, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really see the shading, can you make it darker and also blur it in more. I still have a slight misgiving about the stripes as well... they don't really look natural. Try looking at either Bramble's work (Swallowtail and Webfoot are good examples) or Dawn's style (Rowanclaw and Tigerstar) and attempt to emulate either style. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:37, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I refuse to let this cat beat me. Comments?-- Ashstar My Clan 19:13, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Tbe stripes look much better, but now they need blurred. Just once or twice running the blur tool over them should be good. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:40, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded The stripes were blurred but, I blurred them some more. Better? (still working on the siggy)-- Ashshadow My Clan 20:40, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(Nice sig colors, but for the Ashshadow part, you should makethe background black or a darker color.) -- Mossy SC  22:34, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the neck needs blurred some more. The tabby stripes look much better. Also, you could add some shading on the top of the head, between the ears and the muzzle. If the shading's already there on the head, then it needs darkened. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 03:44, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. the shading on the head was really hard to blur. Should I lighten it some to make it less standoutish? -- Ashshadow My Clan 22:19, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the head looks fine, but the shading on the neck still needs blurred some more. Use the dodge tool once or twice over it at 50% and then blur, and I think it should be good. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 03:22, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded The neck shading is blurred as much as possible without hurting the stripes. Also I lightened it. Better? -- Ashshadow My Clan 21:01, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - This might be this computer, but the face stripes look like war paint. Could you change it? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:20, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think this is much better but its the best I can do.-- Ashshadow 20:47, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

I love your tabby stripes. Blur them just a tad. mabie just one round of the blur tool if you're using pixlr. careful not to blur it too much. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:13, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Spottedwing =). As for the stripes they start to look gray when blurred more than this. Should I blur them more anyway?-- Ashshadow My Clan 21:34, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Well silver tabbies have distinct black tabby stripes and if they start to look gray it'll ook more like the base color. I vote keep it that way.-- Mossy SC  21:36, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 15:13, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Mothwing-For Approval
Here is Mothwing. Comments? ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 19:07, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great, Hiddensun! All I can see at the moment is that there's a couple of black pixels that need to be added to the eye. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 23:28, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

I looked at the eye and there is no pixel missing. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 23:46, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I think it's just the bright yellow pixel I saw and thought it was a white pixel. I'm so sorry. Otherwise for the image, I can barely see the ear pink, it needs thickened and brightened. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 23:56, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploade  ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 01:45, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Wow. Nice tabby markings! Just darken the shading and she'll be good to go. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:57, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

This looks like a golden brown cat. Try making it more of a golden one like your first image. <span style="color: Black; font-family:Comic Sans MS; background:Blue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black;">Mossflight 22:58, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

well it says that she has dark markings. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 23:11, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-darken shading ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 21:16, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

She looks good, but tabbies generally have an M-shaped marking on their head. If you look at pictures of real tabbies, you'll see what I mean. Sparrowsong 22:02, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-added the "M" on her forehead. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 00:43, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Make the shading darker still as It's still not really visible. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:15, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Her tabby markings look very brown... I always thought of them as just a darker golden. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:54, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-i make her tabby marks lightther. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 00:49, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Thanks! That does look better. And, on the tail, why does it get lighter towards the edge? Is it a highlight? I can't see a cat having light on opposite sides of their tail. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:24, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-well i did it lighther because it was part of tehe shading, but now i reuploaded ti darker.is ti better? ★ Hi dd en sun '<font color="#008080">Talk 19:58, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

If I'm being honest I can't see anything preventing this from being approved so comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 22:08, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Soft Paw Blanks- For Approval
, I don't really like them xD.-- Darkhallows 03:56, November 5, 2009 (UTC)


 * literally dies of awsomeness* WOW!-- Shad owed  heart  11:24, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, these look great! Only one thing - the front paws look a bit... round. I know that they're supposed to be tucked in, but could you make a line inside the curve, just so that you can see where the paw is? (Sorry if that didn't make any sense - I can't explain it any better.) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:56, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Love the pose! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:39, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks you guys. || Is the paw/leg any better?-- Darkhallows 19:06, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

These are really good. The only thing is they each need their own file like the other blanks. -- Ashstar My Clan 21:03, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

The paws still look odd and they look very skinny, try making them fatter.-- *Minn owc law*  01:17, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I don't think they're that skinny. I mean, they're not kittypets! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:26, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

These are good! But maybe you could show part of the tail-tip near the head (if you know what I mean)? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 01:57, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I exist! I don't think that they are too skinny. They are feral, after all. As for the paws? They are a little annoying to play with, so I changed the first one. Better? worse? And I would Blackclaw, but the tail would look way too long then.-- Darkhallows 09:55, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I like the other paws better. Perhaps give them a couple of claws or something, or make them slightly less rounded though. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 22:10, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I like the other paws better, like the one on the male longhair (the one on the upper right hand corner). I don't know how you would fix this, but the paws on the shorthairs look odd...like the lineart is thicker or something. Try to make the paws on the shorthairs look more like the paws on the longhairs. Also, as said before, these all need their own file for each, not just one file for all four of them. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 22:34, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Ivytail (RC) - for approval
CHOCOLATE BROWN KITTY! Sorry about that... well, my third tabby elder in a row. Sandy, can I have that list you have becuase I just going by elders?-- *Minn owc law*  02:05, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ugg, I didn't like the ear pink.-- *Minn owc law*  02:09, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

This looks really good =) I'm going to try and put my list somewhere as soon as it's finished. It should be a few days (in theory).  Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 07:03, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, go to my user page for a link to my list. 'Twas much quicker than I thought to complete. (I neglect my homework...) The image: Add a highlight to the top edge of the tail and strengthen the ones on the face and chest so they're the same as the one on the flank. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:52, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been on much. I'm sick (>;-;<) <- (yay odd emoticon!) anyway, here he is.-- *Minn owc law*  23:49, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Hope you feel better soon, Minnow. On the image; looks awesome, just blur the ear pink. -- Bramble -san  17:24, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

O.O Get well soon Minnow!-- Mossy SC  23:14, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Her haunch seems very round, I think it's because of the highlight being where it is. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:28, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Uggg! I'm better now, but I'm so busy, (goes and hits mission out reach president with the money with earned, science teacher with a microscope, upper school chorus teacher with the piano and math teacher with a dog, (I took that from bramble!) ) Stealthfire, well, a cats haunch in round, so....-- *Minn owc law*  23:18, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, Minnow! I think the haunch looks fine, but the ear pink looks a bit too...circular. Try adding just a little bit to the top, to finish it off in more a triangular shape with the ear. Not much, but just a little. Great job! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 03:26, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

I like it! Its cool --Shenzi100 18:51, November 15, 2009 (UTC) ShEnZi100

Violet - For Approval
Wow...I haven't done a real charart in like, forever and a day. I do apologize for my inactivity - with WCWiki, my stories, charart requests, and school for me to worry about, I haven't had much time for the PCA. Anyway, here's Violet as a BloodClan cat. Sparrowsong 21:47, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading some. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 23:24, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

This is great! Just a couple of things: --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 02:39, November 8, 2009 (UTC)
 * The ear pink should be more pink instead of the purpley (is that a word?) color you have.
 * Blur the stripes more.
 * Color the nose a pinkish color.

I know it's only been a week, but this hasn't been worked on in a while... -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:17, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

You're right Icethroat. Normally I'd say to give it some leeway beacause everyone's been busy lately, but the page has reached its capacity so I'm going to have to say, Sparrowsong, please work on this or it will have to be declined. Sorry. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:11, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Lightningpelt- For approval
A minor character. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 00:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

The white streak on her back would probably be on the lineart, rather than on the side of the pelt like it is now. Otherwise, great job, Hawkfire! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:26, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Icethroat, and also make the ear pink more of a fine triangular shape, and less of a bright pink color. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦ <font color="Purple">Contribs 01:49, November 9, 2009 (UTC) Awesome! Um I don't really see anything *goes closer* Nope &#91;&#91;User:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;background:silver; color:goldenrod;&quot;&gt;&#39;&#39;&#39;Icestorm&#39;&#39;&#39;&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;sup&gt;&#91;&#91;User Talk:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;color:blue;&quot;&gt;How&#39;s the prey running?&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;/sup&gt; 02:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Make sure you make it slightly smaller, as we probably wouldn't be able to see it all. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:04, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the streak on the back, and worked on her stripes and ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 19:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Q) for approval
Wanted to do another queen. Comments?--<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:22, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! Just thicken the shading and she'll be ready. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:17, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Also, blur the shading more.-- *Minn owc law*  00:00, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:20, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:32, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

The shading's too dark, it needs lightened. Also, the ear pink needs to be longer in the ear, since the ear's big the ear pink has to be bigger with it. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 15:44, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading, made the ear pink longer, and because of my pickyness, I tweaked the eyes a little bit. What else? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:30, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading more and she'll be ready Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:13, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 19:49, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Hollyflower (W)- For Approval
-- Darkhallows 07:24, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, Shady... I'll never learn how to do that furry effect like you do... *drowns in awesomeness* The only thing is that the shading should be darkened a bit. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:15, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see the shading on the white parts and on the tip of her tail and rear legs look black. Lighten them up to look like a dark gray like the others.-- *Minn owc law*  23:59, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Alright, played with the shading.- Darkhallows 09:46, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Her front foot furthest from us and the tail tip looks black. Other then that, absoutly georgus. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:04, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Brook- For Approval
I love Brook; thank goodness Stormfur didn't fall for Squirrelflight (Ew)! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 15:33, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, she's beautiful! I see nothing wrong. -- Mossy SC  21:19, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, I fixed some stuff on this cat using the line art that you made. Sorry, I'm using Paint, so I don't know how to blur the colors.I hope you like It. Any more comments?

Nightwhisker98 Nightwhisker98 21:14, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Nightwhisker, instead of putting every reply on the bottom of the page, please put it in the discussion you are replying to. (Does that make sense?) Also, don't use Paint for Chararts. Use pixlr instead. Here: http://www.pixlr.com/editor/ -- Mossy SC  21:20, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Honeyfur, add a little bit more shading to the back, belly, and legs, and she should be ready. Very nice job, she looks beautiful. -- Bramble -san  17:13, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Moss and Bramble! How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:10, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'd say make the streaks a darker or more orange-like color so we can see it against the fur. Shad owed  heart  12:55, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Graywing-For Approval
All right, since my Shadowstar is taking FOREVER to get comments on it...here's my Quailfeather!-- Mossy SC  22:27, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Great, Mosspath! Thicken the shading and make the highlights brighter, and this should be good. Also, add a highlight on the head, and since this is a longhair, maybe add a highlight on the top of the tail. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 23:46, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Grr Icethroat. I was just about to say the same thing, but you said it first. <(-_-*)> mad. Just kidding! <(^_^)>. Do as Icey says Mossypath and this should be good. OMG! I just thought of a nick name for you Mosspath! What do you think of (I know it's odd) Mossy P. LOL. <(&_&)>-- *Minn owc law*  23:53, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Moss!!!do what ice said and add shading to the herbs. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 23:55, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

I was going to say the same thing as Ice too, minnow. lol ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 23:56, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

This is one reason why I LOVE the Charart Project. Everyone is so funny! ^.^ KK, I'll get this done soon, I just felt like typing now! -- Mossy SC  21:00, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded did as everyone said!-- Mossy SC  21:41, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good, but, I don't think Quailfeather's description was ever mentioned in Code of the Clans. Ignore me if I'm wrong. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 00:24, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you so much, Hawktalon. :) I despise false description adders.... Moss, the image won't go to waste; you can use this as Graywing, another gray she-cat who is also a medicine cat. Just darken the color a little bit.(and change the file name) -- Bramble -san  03:39, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Phew! Thanks Bramble and Hawktalon! I wouldn't want that to go to waste! O.O kk, I will do so.-- Mossy SC  23:38, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I made Graywing from Quailfeather. (It had no eye color on the description so I just kept blue.) -- Mossy SC  23:57, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add a highlight on the head, but make sure you keep the eye color and then fill the eye color back in so it's not five shades too light. :) Also, thicken the shading some, but make sure you don't get it too dark. If it's too dark, then run the highlight tool over it once or so after you thicken the shading and blur it.

One more thing, darken the ear pink. Run the burn tool over it once or twice, and then blur it again, and it should be good. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:23, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (WC) - For Approval
Well, not much to say about this one...I know that Thistlepaw already has an image, but it's not the current description, since his gender and color was changed. Should I take this down, since Thistlepaw already has an image? -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:10, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not sure about whether you should take Thistlepaw down or not. But if he/she is kept up, I think you should thicken the neck shading. It looks great, otherwise! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 21:51, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the neck shading. Look better? -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 22:05, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

I just realized what I said. I meant to say thickened the neck shading, not darkened the neck shading. Silly me, I must have been half asleep. Both my parents have the flu, and here I am in my room making sure I stay away from the sickness while I stay here in my room, which is actually fine by me, leaving me to peace with my laptop. :) So anyways, I thickened the neck shading. Does it look any better? -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 03:20, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Well, this looks good to me. As for whether you should take it down or not... I'm not entirely sure because we've had images redone due to changing descriptions and so he does need an image that matches his description. I actually think this is ready anyway as there isn't much more you can do with a white cat, and the shading looks good on my cp at any rate. Bramble? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:30, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

(sigh) in the character pixels section, we can put her kit picture as 'Kit - Alternate Appearance' or something along those lines. That's the best I think we can do. Anyways, comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  03:22, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Snowfur (Q): For approval
Not that proud of her, I couldn't quite get the shading to work.



Comments? --Bluestar1776 22:23, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Some of the lineart on her ears are blurred a lot, and I can barely see any color on her nose. Also, there definately has to be some shading, and I would maybe blur the gray on the ear that's farthest from us (her left ear), it looks like a circle--Nightfall101 22:27, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - sharpened ears, darkened nose. --Bluestar1776 23:17, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add color to the nose, make the lineart on her hindleg and her front leg that is closest to us black, and lighten the eyes. Also add shading. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:38, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened lineart, colored nose. --Bluestar1776 16:03, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Drumroll, please!! *drumroll drumroll drumroll* Thanks, Echo, for showing me how to do the shading! --Bluestar1776 19:21, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I an kind of see that there is shading but you need to darken it slightly. Use the burn tool and rn it over a few times. Then use the blur tool to blend the shding in. Also, the ear pink needs to be more triangular Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:15, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened shading, fixed ear pink. Lol, is it blurry enough for you? Hahaha I'm just kidding it sucks. --Bluestar1776 17:12, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I put up two versions. The second one is a thousand times better, in my opinion. --Bluestar1776 17:29, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Moss- For Approval
My first loner. I think the shading needs work. Comments?-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:30, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

I think, If you slightly darken the shading (and thicken the shading on the back of the hind leg) it should be good. Nice job! :) P.S. Sorry I couldn't help with the sig, nice one!-- Mossy SC  23:35, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

she's REALLY good!!1just add a little more of highlights and make the ear pink. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 23:36, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Do I have to add a highlight? I'm not very good at them. I'll get to the shading and ear pink in a few. P.S. Its okay Mosspath, Icethroat helped me.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:40, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

well not really but either make some parts darker or lighther. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 23:41, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

I don't really understand what you're saying. Can you explain please?-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:43, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Good. Okay, I think i know what Sunny means. If you add a highlight in the middle of the body, it'll make the shading look darker.-- Mossy SC  23:59, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add ear pink. If it's there it's way to dark. Also blur the shading. Other then that, it looks really good. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:00, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry the earpink slipped my mind. Is this better, I darkened the shading some.-- Ashshadow <span style="color:cyan;">My Clan  23:04, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck. --Bluestar1776 19:32, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Swiftbreeze (W)-For Aproval


Here's my first charart! I'm very proud of the tabby stripes, they were hard to do. Well here she is, Swiftbreeze from Bluestar's Prophecy--Nightfall101 04:26, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is really good for a first charart! Just blur the white areas a little more, and perhaps don't make the tabby stripes so bunched together.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:10, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Wowzers, I'm impressed for your first charart! Don't bunch up the tabby stripes so much, and the picture itself looks a little blurry... try saving it in PNG format next time. --Bluestar1776 19:05, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Your pupil is gold like the rest of the eye, make it black please!!!--Honeyrose34 20:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink just a little bit smaller. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:21, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

How do I save it in png format?--Nightfall101 02:23, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well when you save the image on pixlr, a box will come titled, 'Save Image' Bring down the list next to 'Format' and choose PNG. Follow me? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:41, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Logfur-For Approval
This is Logfur. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:46, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the stripes or lighten the pelt because it's hard to see them.-- *Minn owc law*  20:18, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the image looks very dark and very red and there seems to be some paler grey/white on the lineart. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:25, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

The image is really really dark. The image needs lightened a lot. Try the dodge tool on 100% size 100 or 200, so you get the entire image. Use the tool about three or four times, or maybe six or seven. Until you think it's bright enough, which you'll probably know. Also, the lineart does look gray in some areas. From what I can see of it, though, the tabby stripes look very nice. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:49, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat, it's waaaaay to dark. And I do see the gray lineart. But I really like the stripes!--Nightfall101 05:38, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

It did say Dark Brown but it looks like this is to dark :) I will do this ASAP. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:28, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Waaaaay to dark, I can barely see the stripes. The shading is good, though. --Bluestar1776 19:04, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (W) - For Approval
Okay, so I'm really sorry Shady but I checked the timings of the reservations and I did have him on my current projects before you. I would have let you have him but I'd already made him... Construtments? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:43, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the stripes so it's easier to distinguish them from the pelt better.-- *Minn owc law*  20:14, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

lol. How did I know I'd never get the stripes right? I made them as dark as Braveheart's to start with, but I guess it goes to show how even two images so similar and made in exactly the same way can be so different. I went over them with the burn tool. Any better? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:23, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

No problem Sandy. I thought I had checked. -- Darkhallows 22:46, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (A) - For Approval
um... not much to say... I don't even know her character as I haven't read Bluestar's Prophecy but she needed an image and wasn't reserved so... constructments? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:43, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Well, I don't know how to do torties and I am terrible at the, but this is great from what I can see besides the ear pink is very fadded into the pelt.-- *Minn owc law*  20:10, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Minnow. I know what you mean about torties... I suck, but I think I'm getting there. Reuploaded. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:21, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Nice, Sandy! But she needs more white since she is tortoiseshell-and-white; this looks like a regular tortie, which is usually mostly black/dark brown with small ginger blotches and maybe a little bit of white, while tortoiseshell-and-white cats have a significant amount of white on them. Often, they're just white cats with black and orange patches here and there. Here are some pictures of tortoiseshell-and-white/calico cats: http://images.google.com/images?q=calico%20cat&rls=com.microsoft:en-ca:IE-SearchBox&oe=UTF-8&sourceid=ie7&rlz=1I7DACA_en-GB&um=1&ie=UTF-8&sa=N&hl=en&tab=wi. Hope that helps! :) Sparrowsong 22:07, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't too bad, but the ginger looks too yellowish, and needs to be more ginger. Also, someone must have added a partially incorrect description for Sweetpaw. Right here where I have BP with me, on page 47 is specifically says "...And Sweetkit, who white with tortoiseshell patches, was named after Pinestar's mother, Sweetbriar...", so there needs to be a lot more white, and as I said before, the ginger needs to be more ginger than yellow. This looks like a great start, though! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:23, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I'm glad it wasn't too bad Icethroat ^_^ I'm sorry, but I had to rely on the description on her page so I had a different image of her in my mind than the one that I got from reading that quote. I've completely redone her image and started with a white base as opposed to a black one. I tried to base it on the images you posted, (thank you Sparrowsong) but I'm not sure how well it turned out... anyways (a definite americanism there...), I used a more orangey ginger this time so constructments? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:17, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Great! Much better! Add some shading on the white part of the pelt, and darken the back ear, and this should be ready. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 15:47, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, there was already shading on the white but I darkened it. And blah blah, I have nothing to say for the ear, i fixed it. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:16, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Fantastic! Just lighten the ear pink some, and it should be good; the ear pink's just a little too dark right now. The dodge tool once or twice should do the trick. Great job! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 16:26, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:01, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Yayy Sandy! ^.^ Nice work, it's just my opinion, but I think it's pretty much ready. (But who am I to say that?)-- Mossy SC  21:52, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Mossy, everyone's opinion is valuable. x Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 22:00, November 14, 2009 (UTC)


 * ) Thanks!-- Moss SC  22:01, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on one of the hind legs, it sort of blends in with the black patch, but if you look at it closely, you can tell that the lineart is blurred. Aside from that, I also think that this is ready. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:06, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

There's also two white pixels on the back hind leg that you forgot to color in ginger. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 03:06, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I got it. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:53, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Yup, you got it. In my opinion this is ready. --  Icy -chan  19:27, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Leaftail (W) - For Approval
Well...told you I needed major improvement on my tabbies. I like how the tail came out, for the tabby stripes on the body...not so good. Comments and suggestions? -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:40, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are beautiful! The tabby stripes need to be a bit larger though. Try varying the size and shape of them. And, this is optional, but maybe add some stripes that don't touch the lineart, but "float" inbetween the stripes that touch the lineart. I hope I'm not confusing you or anything. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 00:56, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if this is better or worse... -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:40, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

This is good, all I'd say is the stripes that go vertically down the pelt look odd. Try making all the stripes go in the same direction. Also, the ear pink is not very visible. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:03, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

What I meant was for the "floating" stripes to go horizontally, like the others. Sorry, I should've specified more. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 13:53, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I started with my original picture and tried to connect some of the stripes, and thickened some of the others. Does this look any better? Also, I lightened the ear pink. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 16:27, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Great job! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 17:11, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:18, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Lilyfur - For Approval
Lilyfur, a minor character. Comments? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 02:52, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

She's soooooo(I could keep going)beautiful!!! All I can see is make the nose a little more pinkish. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 02:54, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Aw, thanks, Sunny! :D Fixed the nose. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 03:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! All I can see is that the ear pink looks too dark, and that it could be lightened to more of a pinkish color. Great job! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 03:15, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

she's really amazing-i see nothing wrong. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#ff1493">Talk 03:16, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Wow. I just can't do shading on white cats. I would just make the ear pink a little lighter. --Bluestar1776 19:03, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Thanks, guys. :D Fixed the ear pink.-- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 02:35, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:21, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Spottedpaw - For Approval
I'm not sure which one is better-looking for a brown cat with ginger flecks... comments? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 03:02, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

wow you're charart are really good!!!I think i like teh second one best-but that's just my opinion. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#008080">Talk 03:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I like the second one better, too. The first one looks more like dark brown with ginger flecks rather than brown with ginger flecks. This looks beautiful! Great job! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 03:15, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

That's an interesting pelt! I love it.I may say lighten the ear pink maby one or two shades.-- Shad owed  heart  13:00, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The seconf one definitely. As for the ear pink.. it looks fine to me but that may be my computer. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:25, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, It was my cmputer. I rebootted and the ear looked fine. Ignore the second part of my last comment. I love the 2nd one, by the way. Shad owed  heart  21:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) - For Approval
Technically he died as a deputy, so here ya go. What do you think?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He's GGOD!!just add more the shading, and blur the ear pink. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#ff1493">Talk 04:12, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He needs a little more shading, and possibly highlights. Right now he looks flat.(I shouldnt say that, because the computer screen is flat) Ok, he looks 2-D.-- Shad owed  heart  12:59, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes don't have a pupil/highlight. --Bluestar1776 15:57, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and the lineart on the hind leg that is furthest from us is blured. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:32, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading, blurred the ear pink, and fixed the hind leg. He already has a highlight in his eye. I sort of made a highlight at the top of his head, but I'm having a little trouble with them.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  16:19, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Darkstar (RC) for approval
I like her name...Darkstar...XD-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 05:30, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I like it, but lighten the eyes a little, or add a white spot to make a glare. (I don't know if that makes scense or not)And maybe darken the fur. Also, when I was reading Code of the Clans, I found the picture that went with the scene she was in. There was a cat somewhere in the middle that was most likely Darkstar, and it was a tabby. (Just a thought, you don't have to make her tabby)--Nightfall101 05:44, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

that's another Darkstar *reuploaded*-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 17:54, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I thought I reserved Darkstar?-- Ashshadow My Clan 18:56, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Actually ignore my previous comment. Yours is way better than mine. Can you darken the pelt a little more, it looks reddish brown right now.-- Ashshadow My Clan 20:00, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I really like this but I have a few small things. 1. Can you darken the shading under the chin and on the neck a little to define this area more. 2. The eye colour is too dark. I like the highlight in the eye but it's hard to distinguish the dark blue from the black of the lineart. 3. The ear pink needs to be smaller and contained within the ear so some pelt colour can be seen around the outside. Look at Cloudstar or Sunstar. It should be a triangle shape and well blended Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 21:56, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Make the nose a little more of a darker pink. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:56, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Shorty - For approval
You like?-- Shad owed  heart  13:06, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Yes! This is absolutely beautiful! The only thing I can see is that the ear pink is way too bright, try making it more of a reddish color like on some of the other approved brown cats. Other than that, this is great! Great job on the tail! --  Icy -chan  13:46, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! Just do what Icethroat said, and fix the areas that have blurred lineart (neck, top of muzzle, etc.) --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 16:00, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed ear pink, and erased all of the blurred lineart I saw-- Shad owed  heart  20:59, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Cave-Guard Blanks - For Approval
They're baaaaack XD With Shadowedheart's permission, I am now doing the Cave-Guard Blanks again. They took forever to make. I used many references to get the anatomy right. But, enough about that. Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 13:14, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, these look great! The front two legs look skinny, though, compared to the big hind legs. These are probably the best cave-guard blanks I've seen, great job! --  Icy -chan  13:52, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks a bunch, Icethroat :D Love the new sig, by the way! Thickened the forelegs. Better now? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 15:50, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

These are way better than the ones I put up... Just two things: First, the part where the two forelegs connect with the chest/belly, the two lines are go too in into the legs. Just shorten them a bit. Second, the part where the tail on the longhairs connects with the rest of the body needs more of a curve, not a straight line. Otherwise, they're great! By the way, Icethroat, love the new sig! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 15:56, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thankies, Rainwhisker ^-^ I fixed the afforementioned areas. Better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 16:11, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

The tail on the shorthaired ones looks kind of... odd. --Bluestar1776 17:17, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

So, how do I fix them? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 18:29, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Make it more pointy, like the tail on the longhairs, but not too pointy. Thanks for the comments on my new sig! --  Icy -chan  18:36, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the tails on the shorthairs. And your welcome, Icethroat:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 19:06, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D)-For Approval
This is Hawkfrost as deputy. Rembember? Mistyfoot was taken by Twolegs then Hawkfrost became deputy? Anyways comments?<font color="#0000ff" style="background:Lime">Icestorm <font color="#add8e6" style="background:Blue">May StarClan Light Your Path! 17:14, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

This really needs shading. It looks like you just made this in paint. Try using pixlr. Just search pixlr on google. --Bluestar1776 17:16, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, I did use pixlr.com. I just forget to use shadding that's all. I'll go work on it right away. <font color="#0000ff" style="background:Lime">Icestorm <font color="#add8e6" style="background:Blue">May StarClan Light Your Path! 17:38, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Hawkfrost is a tabby. Look at his warrior version for an example. --  Icy -chan  18:37, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Leafpool
Hey you know what we really need? Leafpool as a warrior! She becomes a warrior in the fourth apprentice

Whoever this was forgot to sign. Also, all we'd need to do is get the medicine cat version of Leafpool, and erase the herbs, and we'd have her warrior version. Besides, we're keeping to cats without chararts or cats with incorrect descriptions as their former chararts for now, so I don't think Leafpool's warrior charart is very high on our list of priorities. Sorry. --  Icy -chan  19:24, November 15, 2009 (UTC)