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Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:09, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Try...Making the floof more fluffy and shaggy. It looks spikey now. :S 18:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Dazzly? o3o 09:59, 14, 06, 2012

Uhm...withdrawing. ^^; *is no good at floofs* 10:12, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3 16:54, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. ^^ 05:45, 15, 06, 2012

Add a little more floof on the haunch. 22:35, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, Silver only just took over and hasn't uploaded yet. Please don't comment if she still hasn't uploaded... 05:02, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ohmaigawsh I killed it ;3;. 23:33, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Add more floof, or define it. =3 23:43, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. 21:01, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? 21:08, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And do kittypet kits need a collar...? I can't remember x.x 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

He wasn't a kittypet, he was a rouge or something, he was part of BloodClan as a kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 22:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Unsure on changes. 22:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 22:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Kill ze waste. 22:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the black a tad. 02:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiiiny bit lighter, so the white is lighter. (But then you might have to define the shading on the back. Doesn't make sence. =_=) 07:19, 08, 06, 2012

Re-Ups^ @Dazzy, I'd rather not smudge because it doesn't look smudged on the rogue and loner images. 21:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is kind of flat... Can you define the lightsource? 14:17, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Black and White cat shading. e.e 18:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks flat. Define the 'highlight' and enlarge it, and darken the shading. 18:37, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I tried by best. e.e 17:54, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on ---> side. Skt Spoilers... 02:57, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

It may be just me, but there seems to be darker colored squares on the chest... ouo 03:49, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it too, but it looks like a square of lighter pixels. owo Also define the shading on the white. Skt Spoilers... 04:10, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, my computer account is being spazzy and I can't log into it, and that's where I have all my files. e.e I will possibly be able to fix it though. 20:00, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (Ki) - Redone
You are looking at failure. So hard to draw dem stripes on dis small, cute, little, adorable kit blank! Meh. Redone to match other images. Comments? 04:49, 09, 06, 2012

Define the shading. Nicely done.

Adorable <3 Maybe blur the stripes a Tiny bit, And possibly make his base coat more, cream? Not sure if thats the right word, more like his other images, looks a bit pink to me. -- 06:04, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. ^^ Raven, I wasn't quite sure what you ment, so I just airbrushed the coat color with a lighter, pinkish color a bit. 06:23, 10, 06, 2012

Define the shading more, and perhaps thin it out a bit as the color looks off cause of it. Also, where's your light source? I can't quite tell. 09:19, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit? 19:33 Sun Jun 10

Reuploaded -  Just redid the shading. 02:37, 11, 06, 2012

There's a little bit of waste around his tail. 19:26, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:58, 12, 06, 2012
 * Changes ain't showing. 06:02, 12, 06, 2012

I'm not sure if it's the base pelt or the shading, but he looks too dark. lighten the shading if it's that~ Skt Spoilers... 13:21, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I believe it's the shading. x3 09:10, 14, 06, 2012

Still doesn't match.... not sure what to tell you, if it's the shading. Maybe thin it out even more. 06:15, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I'd lighten the shading some more, but also thin out the head stripes. 22:42, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Err... this image irks me, the shading, the stripes, the colors. x.x  06:24, 16, 06, 2012

Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Near the top of the tail looks like some miscolored pixels. Can you fix those? 19:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur stick out more like the other images, rather then curve a bit. It should basically stand on end, like he got electrocuted or something. 22:50, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not good at tail tweaking... o3o Withdrawn. 22:59, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 99.58.201.247 23:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * That was me. o.e  23:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur at the base of the tail stick out more. 23:02, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, please don't critique the charart if the user taking over hasn't uploaded yet. 05:40, 16, 06, 2012

Tallpoppy (Alt. Q) - Redone
She was redone because her pelt color didn't match her other images, she was seen just without stripes, so she should be the same color etc, just without stripes. Also, her eye color and ear pink didn't match, and her shading was hard to see. 13:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the belly shading. Also, can you fix the eyes? It looks as if one of them is staring in a different direction than the other one. Looks good ^^  19:40, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little bit too. :3 20:14, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the lighter belly. Since this alt is going off appearance, that's not optional anymore, and should be removed. 22:48, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 04:49, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading some. Skt Spoilers... 06:28, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 05:39, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it moar. 8D Nicely done.

Re-uploaded Thanks! -- 02:40, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading just a little bit more~ c: 10:12, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 22:57, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink match more, color-wise. Nice job! 23:06, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink's fine, imho.

Sneezepaw (A) - Redone
Added a new layer of shading. Comments? 22:46, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly lighten the shading by the tail a bit? 22:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Eh. The shading on this is really iffy....Icy, if you want to re-do it, that way it won't get tweaked in the future for the same thing, go right ahead.

Re-Uploaded: Shading on gray and white apprentices is hard... 23:51, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the kit. The kit isn't being redone, therefore the pattern stays. 23:54, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Fail on my part. 00:01, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Move the white on the tail to the other side, make the white on the face centered like the kit, shrink the white on the haunch a bit, and get rid of the white on the shoulder that's connected to the chest. 00:10, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 00:22, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste by his face. And if you can, could you darken the shading a little? Breeze whisker  02:39, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pattern still doesn't quite match. Try copying it from the old apprentice image. The pattern from there was fine, it was just the shading that needed changing. 04:29, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

This was ment to be tweaked, not redone. x.x If this stays up, make the tail gray go all the way to the end of the lineart, get rid of the gray inbetween the eyes down to the nose, bring the gray down to the haunches and belly and there seems to be some stray shading (dunno the word xD) around the haunches and front left forearm. :/ <span style="">09:42, 14, 06, 2012

There's some stray waste on his spine and between his haunch and tail. =P 15:22, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste beside his face -- 23:07, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Acornleaf, please don't repeat what has already been said. 23:09, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

DJ, I gave her permission to re-do it. ^^;; It's perfectly fine, and it would be much better off as a redo.

Re-Uploaded: Changed pattern to match Misty's apprentice. If I darken the shading, it looks weird. ._. 17:47, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

owo Define the tail shading just a bit. 06:05, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Defined tail shading. 14:50, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 16:40, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

If I blur it it will blend in with the pelt and if I define it, it'll look weird. 16:42, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

There is this weird strip of something on his tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 17:04, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

That "weird strip" is white. And I'm not chnaging it, it's part of the pattern. 17:07, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

No, not the white, it's on the gray. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 17:08, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

The "Weird strip" is shading; and it's fine. And next time, please try to refrain from using the word "weird" to describe something when commenting on an image in case "weird" offends someone. =.= 19:47, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Don't tell me to define them, as I've already gotten a request to do that. OA's me.

Re-uploaded. Woo.

Define the tail shading a tad? -steals- <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 00:49, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the haunch/tail shading just a little bit. c: *in luff with this* 01:06, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can't define the tail shading. It's a shorthair, and trying to shade the tail is a pain in the..well, you know. >.>

Could you darken the stripes a tad, so my horrible eyes don't have to zoom in. Your choice though. <span style="">06:35, 15, 06, 2012

Honestly, I think it fine. If I darken them, it'll look...odd.

Sorry I agree, they're hard to see, and could be darkened. 07:25, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not all cats have extremely visible stripes, but whatever. e.e

Lighten the whole thing up a bit, it's really dark right now. Like, near-black dark. 09:52, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Those stripes annoyed me. e.e

Ferncloud (Q) ~ Tweaked
I added stripes. I don't know who the OA was but it was tweaked for shading by Scarly. Comments? 00:24 Sat Jun 16

Can you lighten the stripes to match the warrior and alt. queen more? 00:43, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:49 Sat Jun 16

Lighten the stripes up a tad, and if that's a stripe and not a speckle I see on the forehead, right below her fluff, remove it. 09:50, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:22 Sat Jun 16

Echosong (KP) ~ Tweaked
Shading was really really bad and I made her more silver. I also redid the stripes on her forehead. OA was me. Comments? 00:29 Sat Jun 16

Can you lighten the shading? It's really dark right now  01:15, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:19 Sat Jun 16

That collar... =P Define the foreleg shading just a bit. 05:07, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded OwO 05:21 Sat Jun 16

I dunno if it's supposed to be like that, but the last couple pixels on her tail tip aren't dark like the rest of it. And maybe make the earpink a tad less pink? It says Allons-y on her collar LOL  <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 05:32, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D 05:40 Sat Jun 16

Nightwing (W) - Tweaked
It might looked redone but it's not actually. I just re-did the shading, played around with the earpink, and fixed the eyes. I was the OA. Comments? 01:49, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Without anypony telling me, I just thought the highlights were too bright. 01:51, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Snow (TB) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed definition. owo OA was Splook. Comments? 05:13, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA was me. I redid the stripes and the shading. Everything else is the same.

Define the shading a tad. 18:23, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Whitetail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be short haired. Do I need to change the earpink? 18:57, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (W) - Tweaked
I killed it. >:D OA was me. I wanted to kill the shading. Comments? 00:13, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shading's fine.

Splash (Lo) (KP) - Redone
Black was pure black and shading needed to be redone. OA was Darkhallows. Comments? 00:20, June 17, 2012 (UTC)