Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 103

Snailpaw (Star) ~ Approved
Every single color is from the apprentice charart. Comments? 21:34, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, smudge the fur into the earpink, and add a chest highlight, it looks flat. Bb un   legs  21:38, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

The shading looks odd, it looks like a slanted line going from his haunch straight up across his chest. Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 22:35, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I think I might have made the shading a little too light now, but I'll fix that later. 22:42, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

Shading needs defining or lighter parts defined. 22:52, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 00:08, April 1, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the shoulder highlight and make the stripes in the tail less paintbrushy 20:20, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. 21:13, April 5, 2013 (UTC)'''

Make the leg stripes a tad darker and make the tail stripes a bit more pointed. 21:51, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sorry, I tried to make the stripes on the left forepaw darker, but it wouldn't do anything. GIMP's fault. But the stripes are darker, and the tail are more pointed, but it is hardly noticable. GIMP's fault again, stupid gaussian blur. 00:48, April 6, 2013 (UTC)

Can you thin out the stripes a bit? Right now they look painted on. 12:57, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had to re-do the entire thing. I made the stripes thinner, made the shading a little different, and changed the eyes; I like these ones better. 15:44, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a little bit to match the warrior. Looking good so far~ Bb  un   legs  16:03, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I made the stripes a little but thicker, but they are pointier. Thank you, Bbun. 23:02, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

One last thing: Could you darken the shading a wee bit for it to match the other chararts? This is wonderful. Bb un   legs  23:03, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 00:01, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Comments before approval? 21:37, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

None, Approved 02:19, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Silverstream (Alt. Star 2) ~ Approved
If I'm not mistaken, in The Lost Warrior, she is portrayed the same as she is in the manga at the end of Crookedstar's Promise. Comments? Bb un   legs  18:20, April 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Forgot the nosepink XD. Bb un   legs  18:39, April 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her back. Lovely<3 19:28, April 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  20:50, April 3, 2013 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading on her tail, near the haunch? Stunning Bbun, stunning. 0.0 22:40, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  01:20, April 6, 2013 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a bit more red to match the other image? Then it should be ready for CBA. c: 13:15, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Color-picked the earpink from the warrior ^^;. Bb un   legs  14:51, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Lovely! Comments before approval? 21:32, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

None, Approved 02:19, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Quailheart (Star) - Approved
All matches the warrior. This pattern... 05:49, April 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail.

Re-uploaded. 05:15, April 3, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes a little to match. 20:54, April 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I lightened them a little, but on the warrior they're blurred a tad more, so I did that. 22:12, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define the lighter part on the tail. 05:24, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:57, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments before approval? I love this pattern. .o. 21:32, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

None, Approved 02:19, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Stone Song (P3) (Ki) - Approved
First kit for the wiki! Whoo! Said he needed a kit image...Suggestions for improvement for Stone Song? 23:32, April 4, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light parts on the legs and tail and I think this should be good. 05:23, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Defined the light parts on the legs and tail. Tail was hard though, I'm not sure if you can tell that one or not... 19:55, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on his left side a bit, I'm having trouble seeing the earpink ans stripes on that side. Great job~ 14:32, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Dodged the shading on that side a bit. 19:40, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 21:29, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

None, Approved 02:19, April 11, 2013 (UTC)