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Smokekit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I actually like this wow 19:23, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, if there is any. Looks lovely. c: 19:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. Its probably my monitor or its probably really hard to see. 13:58, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. I love the blue eyes.

Re-uploaded 14:16, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 09:40, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded That's as far as I'll define it - anymore, and it wouldn't look right. 23:47, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of light to the chest and define the light on the face? 02:43, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:12, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

define the leg shading. 17:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paw furthest away from us. With this source, there should be light there. 07:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:37, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Me no like. ;-; (Did the image align? or did I misname? I can't tell)

Smooth out the shading on the back, define the hind leg shading, define the eye depth, and blur the earpink just a tad. Looks nice, other than that. 18:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. 18:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Don't know if changes are showing.

Blur/smudge the shading more, and smooth it out. It's looking a bit blotchy right now. 23:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have no idea why this didn't happen when I did Spiketail. Probably because I'm used to setting it to at least 20/25

Define the shading on the legs. Those eyes look sexy X3 09:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit? 12:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened shading and tried to define a bit but I don't know if I can see it. By the way, when you said define shading on legs, did you mean all? And thanks about the eyes, Foxy :P  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:38, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah define the shading on all four legs :p 13:39, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on all four legs. 02:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, but it sort of confuses me to define the shading and the light. I'm not sure if changes are showing but I wanted to get this done so I didn't get this declined for lack of work. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:18, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Defining the light and shading means that basically you need to erase either some shading or put some more shading in, and in this case, it appears you need to erase some shading. So define the light on the legs? :P 13:46, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded When I defined the light on the back two legs, it looked weird so I ended up vaguely getting the front right paw and not doing the back left paw. Then again, I'm not sure if the changes are showing, but I wanted to show that I'm still active (The three days felt longer...) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:20, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the depth on the main body 08:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Thistle (K) ~ For Approval
My First Charart! How did I do? 23:39, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Looks nice for a first! 23:43, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

He'll need stripes, as we operate on the "all ginger cats have stripes" ruling, unless they are specifically called solid.

done hmm? 00:01, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ummm, he looks golden to me... Russettail13 (talk) 00:20, April 13, 2015 (UTC)Russet

done He is supposed to be ginger,not golden, so I made him ginger :P 00:22, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Looks too golden, still. A bit more orange ginger, please? User: Dewdrops56/talk 17:23, April, 12, 2015

done Ginger enough?? 00:31, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink 02:55, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

done I think the earpink looks better... I'm having a hard time redoing the earpink scine the image isn't showing up in layers... 20:10, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Any comments? 19:23, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Please wait three days before asking for comments- it's barely even been two. Make him more ginger, please- he still looks really golden.

Please define the light on the front legs and add a bit of light to the hind leg. 02:49, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadow/light on the tail? 22:31, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 19:03, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

That's only something a lead can ask, Storm. Regardless, even if she's not, this is still more than acceptable to be changed to For Approval and I'm going to make you an apprentice, Lilacfoot.

Sparrow Fur (Ro) ~ For Approval
She took me well, around three and a half hours. *shrug*  what kind of tortoise shell is this 15:37, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't quite match - would you like the .xcf for the kit? i also had one ready for the rogue so feel free to look at it to see how her pattern would go on that blank o3o 18:32, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Beebs. Can someone link the kit pic to see the correct pattern? The kit seems more paler. User: Dewdrops56/Talk 15:02, April, 13, 2015

Beebs it'll be lovely to have it - I just don't know how exactly does she look like from the side. Should I make the splotches smaller? 23:41, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

It needs more shading on the belly. Like curl the shading from the edges of the legs upward. 23:43, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

'''Umm is this better? Slightly??''' 10:10, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

idk the kit seems to look lighter 11:00, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups, if it made any differences at all >.> 11:54, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Much better bramble! Get rid of the shadow on the tip of her tail and move it instead on the back/bottom of her tail tip 13:44, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the white, pale, creamy fur on her body seem more... white, pale, and creamy?and blur the shading more at the feet. 19:07, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

I personally think the tail shading is...fine, since that I pretty much copied it from some other images. If somebody agrees with you Storm I'll do that. I'll smudge the shading more later when I get home:) 23:52, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere, and lighten it a few ticks. 04:41, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  10:12, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the shading more? Especially on the chest tail tip and face 14:53, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

The white's looking really grey - did you get the .xcf yet? If so, use the colors from that 18:43, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I got it - but I have to see it after I get home. And sorry to say, if nobody thinks this design is bad, I kinda want to keep my design than copy yours. I don't anyone has actually seen her side. But if somebody says this design is not right, then I'll change it. 02:01, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

I don't mean to sound rude, but if Beebs has a style, when you took on this image, it should be your first priority to try and match that image. While her image shows the front, technically, part of her side is still visible. The kit has patch-like areas, while these are more flecked- you even said it yourself, "my design". Your design should be matching the image we already have..in which part of her side is shown.

Define the shading on the head, and remove the shading on the tail-tip, it shouldn't be there if the bottom of the tail is shaded too… Hope I made sense, I hate explaining things 22:30, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Yep it actually makes sense, Imma try to change her patterns now 13:35, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Is this better? :)''' 14:05, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

smudge the patches on the tail a bit 11:41, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  13:41, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the shading on the tail-tip. 14:04, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

'''I swear I copied the shading from Jagged Peak. ''' 14:41, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, here's a tip to get it to be more of my style, since it still doesn't look quite right - I smudge all of my stripes, texture, patches, and white markings with a size one brush. Try doing that to recreate the look. 17:01, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups, I am dying, but I will not withdraw it! Susume! >:3 13:40, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Slash (Ro) ~ For Approval
Holy cow I spent like five hours on this 15:37, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

0.0 it's totally worth it <3. Define the light/shading more clearly? I can't really tell which direction it's coming from. 00:34, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could u define the ear pink just a little? 08:44, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on all four paws, not the legs? 13:43, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

RIP PCA's main page sorry thats hilarious 21:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

define the eye depth 23:25, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the hind paw furthest from us and the forepaw furthest from us? 22:29, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

reups 00:54, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W) ~ For Approval
Okay.-- 00:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

So yeah, I see no shading whatsoever. Define shading everywhere please 00:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

The lineart looks faded too, actually.

As well as the earpink, define and brighten the earpink 00:54, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''My bad, i had the shading layer hidden still. Not too sure about the lineart- but im hoping i fixed it? It looked solid black on my monitor. 01:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

There's still barely any shading. Darken it alot 01:08, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:22, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Looks much better. Define the shading on the legs? And possibly the tail? Only when you're feeling less tired maybe XD 01:26, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:35, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

He's in WindClan so shouldn't he be short haired? 02:46, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you thicken the tail lineart a bit? I like him. 02:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't the term 'patchy fur' mean 'missing patches of fur'? lmao 13:18, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing - i have a ton of exams to study for. Anyone without a project can take this. 20:02, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. 20:27, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Let me just say this cat has one of the worst names in the series, along with Shredtail and Maggottail. 20:47, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lovely. Define the light on the legs? 21:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! 21:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. 11:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

He looks a tad red- could you shift the base color ever so slightly?

Reuploaded. 23:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink more triangle-like. Lighten the shading a bit, and the pelt color just a tad, like two notches; on my color spectrum, he's a murky reddish-brown. Also define the light on all four legs? 00:49, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:39, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Evalution
Yay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? R a v e n s t e p⋆ 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Better? 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we wait before this is settled? 免得我们还要重做 02:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

No- there's no need, considering it wouldn't be done for a long time.

As far as I'm concerned, the chest is smudged with a hard-edged brush 08:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 01:31, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

he needs texture, and on top of that texture theres dull highlights, and it was all smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 04:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

The chest too, it still looks over-blurred 08:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using the smudge tool in GIMP? I know you said you used GIMP. Use the smudge tool on the white chest. The earpink looks a lot better! Maybe lighten it a bit more? 13:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Oh my, the texture didn't fail… Im insanely proud of this  00:42, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink a bit, and make it less neon-y? 00:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's not neon at all. It blends well perfectly with the fur. 01:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make it more pink than purple please. That's pretty much what Storm was asking, simplified. Just make it a lighter pink on the spectrum. Very nice^^ 13:51, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  17:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I just looked at the apprentice, and I think the patch on his chest is a tiiiiny bit smaller Correct me if I am wrong It could just be my screen though 07:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

But that is the apprentice, which is a smaller blank. 13:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the chest white is fine, so im not changing it yet  19:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's supposed to be small, so please shrink it. While the apprentice blanks are smaller, the patch of white you have on here is much too big.

Re~Upped Ok  22:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I actually saved the image and zoomed it in to see details, and I think I can see a black outline around the white chest and the bottom whisker. There's also a black hard-eged splotch on his back. I like him! Just try to see what I was talking about (might be just my screen) and blur the hind paws shading slightly^^ good job 14:13, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

That's actually normal "waste", per se. Define the light on the front paw closest? 18:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

How is it "waste"? It's on the pelt. 00:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, were you talking about on the warrior or apprentice image, Silver? 00:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I was talking about this warrior image. It could  be just my screen though 00:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Uh yeah... Here world  02:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Clover (AFD) (Ki) ~ For Approval
-in mysterious voice- Mustachio comfirmed 02:19, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink and define the shading on the legs. Ginger Mustache confirmed 07:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 18:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yay different colored eyes!!!!!!!!!!!! Btw, Did my eyes break or the shading is supposed to look purple? >.> Like, reddish purple. She's soooo cute! Idk what's going on with the shading, it looks a bit weird but I can't find any problems with it. you know what, ignore me. 14:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Bramble, im pretty sure its a tint and it looks fine as it is. Define the facial shading, please. 14:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

ha, dapper moustache cat. can you define the tail shading as well? 17:18, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on both visible front legs.

Fern (K) - CBA
-- 21:35, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Since we have no idea when she got her scars, could you add them? We've no proof that she got them as an adult. 08:51, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 16:19, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Mistcloud (W) - CBA
10/10 would make this again 03:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

So floofy O-O Define the light on the front paw farthest from us, and the shading on the hind paw farthest from us. 13:37, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded defined it as much as I can on these blanks 04:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the paws and the back, please? 22:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

i'm gonna have to go and say i reckon its fine this time. 04:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Does she have facial shading? If so, can you define it/darken it? I honestly can't tell if she has it with the amount of demonic fuzz she has.

re-uploaded it's not my entire usual shading because of the fur, but I tried 05:25, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Millie (E) ~ For Approval
Meh. 08:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten up the base? She looks too gray to be silver. 13:34, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

She needs a torn ear.I Iike this :) 14:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Here is an unshaded version of the kittypet for your viewing pleasure.

i dont believe that curled stripe on her leg would be there, its a stomach area stripe not a leg one. 18:35, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Aka much happier 8D 06:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the top of her torn ear  04:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Waste has been slain, thickened a few stripes. 05:18, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Which image did you go off for refs for the stripes? The image also still looks a tiny bit too dark in places...

The kittypet? I'm sure the base color is correct, considering that I color picked from the unshaded Kittypet.... 00:26, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you explain a bit, please? 02:49, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I lightened the shading 08:03, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenwing (Star) ~ For Approval
those eyes are the pinnacle of my art career 17:44, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the chest- I'm pretty sure there would be at least some there. All I see is black.

Yeah, maybe it's my screen, and I'm not even sure if  I'm allowed to say anything bc I'm not in the project,but it looks a tiiiiin y bit too dark...Cheeto Dust 18:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

No, it's fine - I'm pretty sure she'd just be told to make it more black again. Besides, I've seen chararts of similar darkness. 18:08, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I actually forgot to put light on the chest, so thanks for pointing that out. If I make him any lighter, he'll definitely start to look dark gray rather than black. 18:40, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 19:15, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink in the ear closest to us. 19:21, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:13, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still can't see the earpink in > ear. 02:09, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Brackenpelt (W) ~ For Approval
more torts for me yum 21:35, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

She looks so beautiful Beebs! Define the light on the front and hind paws furthest from us. As well as the light on the ears, and maybe blur the ear pink a bit more? 00:06, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 03:04, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur or smudge the ear pink? 05:12, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

if i blur it more then i'll be told to define it so i think it's fine yo 11:26, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

NOT that I'm defending my sister, but I think the edges could use a little smudge, just a tiiiiiiiinnny bit ;;; 11:38, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the second colour? she looks like a mottled russet cat right now. 10:25, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 11:30, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste between the third and fourth chest tufts 14:07, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also unless specifically stated as 'tortoiseshell-and-white', the white should be removed. 14:55, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Petaldust, Mossfire, and Larksong would have to be tweaked if we were following that kind of thing. Nevertheless I think the 'waste' is seen on a lot of warrior images, but i don't know about that 17:03, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

True, I think the white is allowed. But in my opinion I think she looks more like a mottled russet cat than a tortie, can you contrast the colors more? sorry if I didn't make sense I hate explaining btw, she's beautiful 01:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Both white and tabby parts are permitted on a tortoiseshell cat, regardless of whether or not they're called "tortoiseshell-and-white". Google "tortoiseshell cat" and you get a pretty even mixture of torties with and without white.

re-up 02:28, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste between the third and fourth chest tufts. 19:02, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

imo it's fine - MANY other warrior images have that 'waste' and i don't see why it's a big deal on this one. 19:27, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Berryheart (Q) - For Approval
squeeee

The white honestly looks a bit yellow - it could just be me, though. Looks great! 23:12, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shouldn't be now.

O.o I love all the TAQ characters. Could you define the shading on the paws a bit, perhaps? It could just be me, but it looks all light 23:22, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you darken the shading on the white parts of the belly and face? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:05, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

define the shading on the tail? 00:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tweaked a few things.

define the shading on the white parts. 07:53, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Fernsong (W) - For Approval
I love that this name was given to a tom. I'm also really happy with this pattern, less sure about the shading, I went back and forth on the tint. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It might just be me, but I can't really see the earpink. Maybe define that a bit? Also blur the shading in between his flank and legs, as well as that line on his chest. Looks good! 00:41, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Which line on his chest? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:05, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

The shadow line by his leg on his chest 11:59, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:35, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know if this is because of my dumb eyes but is the shading looking a bit green? 05:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading does look a little green on my computer too, but maybe that's the way it turned out on this pelt color? 06:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I would use a darker orange color for the shadow instead of black and then dulling the opacity if that's what you're doing 12:03, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading does have a greenish tint to it. I found it brought out the yellow best. I tried shading with orange, but it made it look more orange than yellow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:33, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

He's pretty, maybe smooth out the shading a bit :D 09:42, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink some more. Jayie, this is outstanding. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:58, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Wasptail (W) ~ For Approval
Yellow tabbies = not my area of expertise 14:38, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Yellow tabbies are generally pale, light ginger. Make her a bit more ginger? Also define the earpink, the light on the front paw farthest from us, and the shadow on the front paw closest. 14:50, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Imo, her fur color is perfect. Could you define the light on her back paw over there <-- though? 17:43, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

File:Wasptail.queen.png you've got an image to match. Burnt posted it first, so it'd be only fair if you matched hers. 23:31, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

The queen image is considered void since the cite is no longer valid. Technically, Sorrel is under no obligation to match it, honestly.

Yep - since the queen was done before the warrior, and it was made void, that means technically there's no image to match at all o3o 23:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh though, if the queen was done first, and it is, still, Wasptail. What if she becomes a queen? It would be unfair for me to redo my image just because the rank was made void for a while since I posted it first? 00:01, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

And if that's the case, then Sorrel's would need to be redone to match yours. That's why I'm not deleting it- there's always that chance. As of right now, with the cites we have, this isn't the case. It would be unfair to force Sorrel to match an image that we do not have a valid citation for.

Exactly. I'm not changing it, sorry. 00:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a little green... Could you turn the base color to the orange side of the wheel or something 11:42, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She does look a sorta greenish, but I love the pattern. 09:44, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Redone after comparing Burnt's and mine, I decided to redo it entirely, to try and match it - not because I had to, but because I wanted a challenge. Tbh, tho, I wasn't exemplary at matching. At least if this is approved and the queen is confirmed, Burnt won't have a lot to change. As for my former version, I'll save that for another charart later, since I do like it a lot. I'm much happier with this, however. 15:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I love this. Maybe define the light on hind leg/paws just a bit :) 01:28, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

This is gorgeous, could you smudge the stripes a bit more to make the "texture" stand out a bit? 02:47, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Oh wow, this looks beautiful with the long fur now! But maybe define shading, only if you have too, or else it already looks good. User: Dewdrops56/talk 13:12, April, 21, 2015

I 1) Can see it and 2) If she defines it it would clash with the gold 13:28, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups thank you all so much 17:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste between the third and fourth chest tufts 19:01, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, its honestly /fine/. The "waste" you're seeing is on alot of warrior images- and its so incredibily minor thats it really seems nitpicky. I know you may not be intending to, but its really not that important. As for the image, define the shading/light on the paws farthest from us. It may just be my phone, so if you believe its fine then by all means dont worry about it. This is amazing, honestly. 20:22, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ok no need to be too rough with her :/ I mean if this was CBA'd and Storm commented about waste then yeah it'd be considered a tad nitpicky. But currently it's fine to point waste out. And even if you didn't mean so, your comment looked a bit hostile. So I don't want to start anything, just defending Storm a bit because it's not bad /at all/ to point out waste. For the image, could you define the earpink for me? I can't see it too well. Lovely job =) 02:05, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Good lord stop being hostile with each other. If you have something to say, keep it off the image section and go to a talk page. The waste thing is kinda nitpicky if it's the only thing being commented on.

Curlfeather (W) - For Approval
Yippie! My first PCA charart! If i shoud make her shorthaired, let me know! 15:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Remove some of the shadow from her hind leg where it curls when she sits, as well as the knob of shadow at the back of her tail; it should be a straight shadow line. Also mind blurring the shadow a bit more? And define the light on the front and hind paw closest to us. 15:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading to the head as well. 16:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch and add a bit more light to the foreleg closest to us. If you want, there's a shading tutorial here 18:11, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more… triangular? And blur it more It might be just me, it looks a little too neon-y 22:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, sorry i haven't had a chance to reupload it yet, i'll do it first thing tomorrow. 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The light could be defined on all the legs tbh 05:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  14:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, use a hard edged blur tool at the rate of 100 14:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reupped- Yay! 14:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)'''

The shading seems to be... disconnected on the back, and it should be connected, so add some shading there. I hope that wasn't too confusing. Also, can you define the light on the legs? 15:13, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped I didn't change the light on the legs because that is how it looked on the shading placement. 15:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking all up his back and in other places too. Define the earpink as well. Sorry if I'm commenting too much. I really like this! 17:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more, please? It's difficult to see. 17:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back. If you're gonna add shading to the back and chest fur and tail, add some to the legs please. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 18:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped- Just re-did all of the shading. @Icebreeze, Don't worry, you can comment all you want :)  19:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, because now the shading is looking... green? I suggest that you shade in black and lower the opacity (you don't have to though) but at least make the shading less greenish. Blur the shading as well. I'm sorry I'm commenting again, you're probably getting really annoyed 20:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped Ugh it isint showing up… You are not annoying me don't worry   22:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lolp at first I thought her name was "Cerealfeather" for some reason :P I see that you're having some problems with the shading, maybe try to make the shading itself smoother, then blue it, if that makes any sense 09:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in and I see some waste around the image. Please remove it. User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:02, April, 20, 2015

Blur and maybe dull the shading a bit more. Also, there's a speck of waste at the very top of the image over the tail 18:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also there's still some shading on her hind leg where it curls when she sits that isn't connected to anything, so if you could get rid of that...? 22:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and then blur the shading more on them 07:52, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, will post soon... 15:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  18:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still need to get rid of the random shadow. It's like right by her underbelly, where the hind leg curls into it towards the knee (?) 18:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I've promoted you to an apprentice, and changed the file name. Caps are very important for these filenames- it should be File:Curlfeather.warrior.png.

Bloomheart (W) - CBA
18:32, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the shading on the legs a little 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:28, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smudged/blurred on the shoulders. 17:42, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:58, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There might be waste between the third and fourth chest tufts, or it might just be my screen .... 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:21, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 08:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
What a traitor. 21:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I never read MV yet, so I can't agree with you xD Define the light on his tail-tip? 01:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the shading on the legs and define the ear pink just a little. Yes, Appledusk is a big mouse-brain and I was like too bad when he died 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 12:21, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There should be light on his chest, and I think the shading could be defined and blurred/smudged more. 17:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 18:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking on his tail-tip? 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly I didn't read MV yet but when I saw he was killed my Mapleshade I went like "Beautiful job girl" blur the shading below the chin and the shading is leaking on the shoulder 15:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The shading was leaking in several other spots, too. 20:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I really hate this and I want to do something else, so I'm withdrawing. 23:39, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Even though im not officially in the PCA, can i take over? 23:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

You don't need to ask just reserve it

-ReUpped Ok, my turn. 03:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading way more and change the heading please 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his pelt color. 18:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, please. 23:29, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

here is the base colour for the warrior image. 04:27, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Podlight (Warrior) ~ For Approval
22:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the shading more 11:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste between the third and fourth chest tufts 14:09, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups I also added some more white parts 14:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think you can define the shading just a little 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:02, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Owlnose (W) - For Approval
these blanks are so small — Sat Apr 18 23:19

Define the ear pink a little? I like =) 12:17, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups thank c: — Sun Apr 19 21:36

Get rid of the waste in between the third and fourth chest tufts 14:09, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups — Tue Apr 21 03:00

Sorrelstripe (W) - For Approval
Wheeee 8) 00:52, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty! Define the light on the tail? Also, you're an apprentice now, so shouldn't your heading say "for approval"? 01:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

lmao oopsies. re-upped. 01:42, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink. 03:20, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-upped. '''Noticed some waste between the third and fourth chest tufts, lmao dunno how I missed that. 13:55, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped again. Got rid of the paler chest/belly after some research. 14:15, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smooth out the shading on the neck/back/main part of the cat.

Heathertail (Q) ~ For Approval
She has a SCARF! Everything from the kit, as I have the file. 02:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She needs more stripes on her legs. You need to look at all the files, not just the kit file, as that only shows the front view. The warrior file is a much better view-point. Also maybe make the eyes more blue-ish, because they look violet. And the head stripe looks super off. Define the shadow on the hind leg closest to us, and the light on the one farthest from us. Maybe add some shadow to the front leg closest to us, define the shadow on the tail, as I can't see any, and get rid of some of the shadow on her face by the side of her muzzle. If the light source is where I think it is, the shadow on that side of the muzzle wouldn't be there. ^^; Sorry if I sound harsh. 03:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes were color picked off so it's fine. All her images are facing another side so it doesn't have to match perfectly to her other images, especially on the body. Also, be careful of how you word things please, because "super off" borders to being rude.... 03:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I fixed the shading around the left legs and tail but that's it. Be mindful that I have the file for the kit, so I gave a hint I made that image, so I know what I am doing. I studied every single image Heathertail has very closely, and she has thick stripes because the queen image is large. Please show a bit more respect, I have been around for a good while and have done many images. I recommend for a new user to just look at the images and advice people give, basically learning through others and give one or two pieces of advice when you're more confident. There's a lot to learn, and that's partly why I like it here. There's something new to learn everyday. 03:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

You could define the eye depth and tail shading a little. 05:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:36, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I do apologize for my behavior. I was extremely tired last night. I still think you could define some of the light on the legs though 11:57, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Also I think some of the shading on her hind leg farthest from us is leaking a bit. 12:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe dull down the shading a bit? 23:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I lowered the opacity ten ticks. 04:34, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadow on the front leg farthest from us? 18:59, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge and lighten the facial shading 05:13, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

can yu sharpen the stripes a bit? theyre not this blurred on her other images. 19:29, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail? gorgeous 11:14, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload thanks! 23:16, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a few ticks on the face, please.

Reupload 23:58, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? Maybe just a smiiiiiiiiiiiidge more? 00:06, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload lightened it a couple of ticks. 04:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Cricket (Ki) ~ For Approval
ew on the stripes, but I did have a lot of fun making this. Everything should be the same as the rogue. 12:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes look fine imo. Add some shadow to the side of his face? Also define the shadow on his front legs and back paw. 12:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 10:38, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:31, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Featherpelt (W) ~ For Approval
It's a rosetted tabby. 16:23 Sun Apr 19

Define the shading on the tail, both paws furthest from us, and perhaps on the haunch? Stunning work, Hawk. 16:35, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, isn't there an apprentice's image to match? Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I thought that but when I checked her page there wasn't anything... <span style="">16:57 Sun Apr 19

Ohh wait I found it... I'll redo it to match. <span style="">16:58 Sun Apr 19

Before I touch it Tiger has nominated her apprentice image so I'll hold off for now. <span style="">17:39 Sun Apr 19

This is amazing.Can yo define the shading on the back leg a bit? 19:50, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She's sooooooooo gorgeous! But I think you should match the apprentice version not just because of the existing image - and because she needs to look more like Feathertail!!! :PPPPPP 09:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I dont think so, as the other one is being redone. Besides this character isnt Feathertail, shes her own character, even if shes named after Feathertail. --Russettail13 (talk) 12:11, April 20, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Umm, I was joking. 14:31, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Please be aware that if you don't have any critique to give, then please refrain from commenting. Discussions like this belong on talkpages, not the Approval Page. Define the shading on the front paw furthest from us- though it may just be my monitor, so feel free to disregard me if you think its alright.-- 16:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 07:47, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

If you don't mind me asking for clarification, define "smooth out" please. <span style="">1:32 Wed Apr 22</span

Define means bluR.--Russettail13 (talk) 01:38, April 22, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Actually, no, define means to make more visible. I was asking her to tell me what she meant by "smooth out". <span style="">1:39 Wed Apr 22


 * smooth out = blur and expand slightly, so it doesn't end so abruptly 03:23, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading looks gorgeous. Maybe smooth out the shading on the legs, though :P 15:07, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:36 Wed Apr 22

Sorrelstripe (App) ~ For Approval
Too much like chocolate? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

re-up its been a while, texture ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten her up a bit? She seems a bit too dark, nearly black. 18:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Her warrior image has a paler underbelly, I think you should add that in. 18:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I used a longhaired blank, so you might want to change that. And you need to add longhaired texture to her tail, flank, her cheeks, and legs. And as Raven said, I put in a paler muzzle, throat, chest, and underbelly. 20:01, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

If her description doesnt call for a paler belly then don't add it 11:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

A lot of things don't call for a paler belly, but everyone still adds them. Example is the above Owlnose. He's just a brown tabby tom, but yet the artist added in a paler muzzle, throat, chest, and paws. Isn't it the first artist's choice, at least until the book comes out and they can be tweaked? 13:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

except tabby cats almost always have paler muzzles and the like. 13:58, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I wasn't worried about her being chocoloate until you mentioned it. Anyway, she's cute!^^ I think you should lighten her color just a bit. And back to the nosepink problem. Does she have a pink nose?? (I hope she does :3)  and I expected her to be "striped"! Sorrelstripe. Yea. The Erins made her un-striped 14:28, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the color needs to be lightened a bit, because it needs to match her warrior image. Maybe color pick from that? Also I got rid of the paler underbelly on my image, so don't worry about it. 14:32, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up wow I forgot the longhiar.. just wait. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:14, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also I think some earpink is leaking onto the ear? 20:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 21:31, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on all four paws and define the eye depth? 22:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Ferntail (W) - For Approval
something before I go to bed goodnight <span style="">23:01 Sun Apr 19

Can you please define the shading on the tail? 23:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes are paintbrushy - try making them more pointy. <span style="">2:33 Mon Apr 20

Define the light on the forelegs 09:48, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Isn't she in WindClan. (which means she needs to be short furred!) 09:55, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also please match this http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Ferntail.queen.png 09:58, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

nope, it doesn't have to match, it's not in use as of the revised allegiences. 10:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Please make her short furred, as she is in Windclan. User: Dewdrops56/talk 6:56, April, 20, 2015

check the previous comments, it's already been said ._. 14:03, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I know Im not dumb, Trollsky. I just said that because the short fur hasn't been added yet. User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:13, April, 20, 2015

Sorry but I'm with Trolly. It's been ''seven. hours. Give the person some time'', for crying out loud. Maybe they're busy! 14:16, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the light on all four legs please 18:59, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups i woke up to this holy shizzle just let me sleep (actually it's after school for me -_-) <span style="">21:56 Mon Apr 20

Define the light on the tail, and the legs please, you forgot to do that. 22:18, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Give the stripes a smudge, perhaps- they look fine in terms of placement, but giving 'em a good smudge would help them blend a little better.

re-ups completely redid shading <span style="">21:42 Tue Apr 21

Define the light on the legs 10:39, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

And the tail 15:08, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

This should be changed to For Approval, as I'm pretty sure you already had one image approved- not sure why you weren't made an apprentice, but let's fix that right away.

Morning Whisker (Star) ~ For Approval
all colors from the xcf 04:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lovely. Define head shading a touch? Russettail13 (talk) 12:03, April 21, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Re-uploaded Extremely difficult to define on the dark spots 13:26, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading just a tad. Lovely work. 22:11, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:52, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Rippletail (W) ~ For Approval
Tell me if he needs to be shorthaired, and if I need to change the eye color 06:34, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the main body and define the light on the legs. 10:49, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Waste in le triangle hole :3 13:50, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading like Fox said, and lighten it a few ticks too. 19:17, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Also, when I was uploading I accidentally created a file named File:Rippletail (SC).warrior.gif could someone delete it for me? 21:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten and smooth out the shading a little more, please. Also, add some light to the legs and back ear, along with defining the ear pink. I have also eliminated the image you've requested me to.

Jaywing (W) ~ For Approval
Tried out some texture.

It looks great! Define the light on the back paw farthest from us? 19:34, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a little. Fabulous texture. c: 20:10, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the texture on the head and all the paws. Lovely job!! =) 01:55, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Approval
A little something before I return to studying for my genetics final. Color picked from kit image. 16:11, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more  18:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

His fur is looking a bit too yellow. Are you using yellow to brighten, instead of white? If that's the case, then replace it with white. Also define the earpink a bit more and brighten it. 18:54, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

reup I also smudged the highlight on the chest more. 19:55, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white on the tail a bit more and define the shading on it. Nicely done, Sunjaw! He matches beautifully and I'll make you an apprentice right away.

reup Thanks, Lightning! The tail tip just would not smudge as much as I wanted it to >.> ... 20:21, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. 01:21, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shadow to his haunches? Looking good! 01:50, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

reup Also adjusted the shading to a darker gray-tinted purple. If it looks off I'll change it back. :3 02:15, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body 04:20, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (W) ~ For Approval
I'm assuming I can post this now 20:07, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes some more, and define the light on the ear closest to us. Looks good 20:35, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you. I blurred the stripes a bit more. I don't think there's supposed to be light on that ear, I used the same light source on him and it was ok, but if someone else agrees I'll add some light. 20:48, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too paint brushy--try and smudge a tip onto them so they're not so uniform. Blur the shading on the back and tail and define the ear pink 21:12, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I wasn't totally sure about what you meant on the stripes, but I tried my best. 23:26, April 22, 2015 (UTC)