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Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. 21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink 01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray 16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Theres waste by the butt 13:45, 5/09/2017

Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--  22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one

Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall 23:50, 5/09/2017

Reups --  20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images.

Reups --  02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place 02:43, 5/11/2017

Is there chest shading? If not, add some. 02:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define flank shading? Nice. :3 03:22, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  04:02, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The placement of the gray doesn't match completely. Especially check the warrior image, as you can see the difference between the shades better there, and also how there's a more defined patch of gray on the face.

Define the shading more 01:29, 5/12/2017

Reups --  02:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Ok I think the gray should match the elder's image since it was lightened/tweaked before the others and if that's the case then this is too dark, also the gray looks softer than the other images, and it's still kinda hard to tell what's gray and what's shading on the chest and front legs

Well, I was just asked to match the warrior image so I'm not sure what to do when critiques contradict each other :/ --  16:05, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The critiques, at least the recent one where I said to match the warrior image, don't contradict. I was talking about the gray placement, such as on the muzzle (which from what I can see, still hasn't been done). Snow is talking about the coloring, which is a separate issue, and also the coloring in other spots not previously mentioned.

There's a stray white pixel on the <--- paw. 21:08, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more 21:31, 5/15/2017

The shading on --> side of the head looks a little dark, maybe lighten and smooth it a little? 13:15, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like defining isn't the right word for this, but expanding is. I've noticed that the artist repeatedly "defined" the shading on the same spots when they should've expand it instead. That's why the shading looks pretty dark and not visible in some areas. It should be expanded on the tail and stomach.

Reups --  21:04, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 21:06, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's a few pixels of grey in the area behind the <- front leg. I think you could smooth that out a little or get rid of it. I can put a red circle on it if you'd like. Branchwing (talk) 01:05, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs, chest, and belly area and lighten the shading everywhere else 04:16, 5/18/2017

I think it looks too dark compared to the other images, but forgive me if it's just my screen or something.

Reups --  20:34, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

There's some hard-edged shading on the arm, see here http://vvcap.com/5NI5dU5r7SI 21:07, 5/19/2017

Reups --  14:44, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

The shading still appears to be leaking by the <--- arm. 15:48, 5/20/2017

Reups --  00:09, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten tail shading on the patch of shading the --> side near above the chest. Also, the --> left paw looks as though it has dapples on it, is it supposed to be like that? Sorry if the last part was rude. :P 02:35, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

No one ever corrected me so I think I'm right that the gray should match the elder image, which is significantly lighter than this

Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more 18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please 01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs 21:32, 5/15/2017

Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">00:56, 5/17/2017

Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

What means tad? – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

tad means a little bit.

Do I have to do something with legs? – 07:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

All you have to do is smooth the shading more over the whole image, and define the speckles a little bit in the shading <span style="">13:55, 5/18/2017

Reupload – 08:56, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin out the shading on her stomach a little? After that I think it'll be good to go. If I wasn't very specific, you can just say that. Basically what I meant is like the shading up from the haunch. 20:20, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken the speckles even more? Also if you're American you might be forgiven for not knowing tad, it's chiefly british --

I am russian ::::\ – 13:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

I noticed no one ever answered your question about shading depth and I still think it could be defined so here's an image of one of the apprentice tutorials, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:BCPrincess73.tutorial.png, which mentions shading depth so I hope that helps you

Pine Needle (W) - For Approval
I really like his name ^^ 08:09 15 May 2017

Define the light a little more on the back paw farthest from us, the tail, and smooth the earpink a little more? nice job! <span style="">21:44, 5/15/2017

Reuploaded Did my best, 04:32 16 May 2017

Smooth the shading on the back legs? Do you use Photoahop, or am I just a really unexperienced GIMP user? xD <span style="">19:18, 5/16/2017

Reuploaded, I use GIMP but I've been using it for a while now I guess ^^; 20:38 17 May 2017

CBA? <span style="">04:19, 5/18/2017

Hate to break CBA, cause this is nice, but smooth out the tail shading? Seems kinda hard-edged to me. <span style="">05:26, 5/19/2017 I feel as though if you smooth it, you'd lose the definition of it. But again, that's my own opinion. 09:47 Sun May 21 2017

Moonflower (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
All colors came from Bluestar's queen image, which I still have the files for. Comments? 22:53, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on both the back paws? 22:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a little on the neck/upper back area? 22:58, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:04, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Think shading's leaking on both front paws.

It's also leaking away from lineart on the back > of --> paw, near the rump area

Define the shading a little bit. Branchwing (talk) 00:36, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth also. <span style="">04:39, 5/17/2017

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  10:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry for the wait; I was on vacation in Florida, had very little time to work on this, and just got back home yesterday. Uploads should be more frequent now. 20:36, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Duskpaw (HJ) (Ki) ~ CBA


Define shadinf depth a little tiny bit 20:44, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Add the paler underside, and add/define the paler parts around the eyes. Would you like the file? 01:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:15, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Mud Paws (W) - For Approval
Yes, I'm aware most of the shading should be smoothed out, I just wanted to get this up before I went to school 11:37, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading just a smidge as well? I like this^^ Rainbowmistake (talk) 12:13, May 18, 2017 (UTC)chat

Idk, in this light source, I don't think that patch of shading in front of the shoulder by the chest would be there <span style="">13:52, 5/18/2017

I've had shoulder shading there on my images. I personally think that is a matter of personal preference if it is placed there or not. Realistically there would be some shading there due to musculature and skeletal placement. <span style="">19:40 Thu May 18

reups @Winter, it's on the apprentice tutorials, so I mean?? It's probably fine anyways 20:33, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

There isn't one source for every image Snowdapple :/ I don't want to come off as rude, but if it was added as a source in the Apprentice Tutorials, why does Snek have to remove that patch of shading? There's multiple sources.. <span style="">21:12, 5/18/2017

And smooth the shading on the shoulder and haunch. Looks kinda blotchy^ <span style="">21:14, 5/18/2017

Shading could be smoothed.

reups why did I even do this I hate shading on warriors Broken, it's fine, I know you weren't trying to be rude but both I and Sunjaw already gave a reason as to why it's fine. Thanks for the help, but it was pretty much dealt with. 21:24, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Wha? Oh shoot I wasn't looking when I said the above comment. Sorry for repeating comments. :P But anways could you define texture on the head?

reups I did your comment, then I decided to define the texture everywhere to better match the other images, and even worked in some texture highlights and sort of did something with the shading?? Idk man but tell me if it looks off now. 22:37, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be shading on top of the head with the light source? 22:38, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

reups 22:53, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe try to round it out more so tht the light is on the front of the leg? Because the shading is kinda leaking onto where the light should be (adding onto previous comment. Also the new alien movie was really spooky ...) <span style="">04:17, 5/19/2017

reups I believe i got where you meant?? 04:22, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

There's some shading on the tail that looks blotchy compared to the rest, see here http://vvcap.com/mEwAiZVwqJE. All in all, it's very nice^ <span style="">05:35, 5/19/2017

reups it was actually texture 20:29, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

There's leaking shading on the start of the tail http://vvcap.com/1aFe3hgGdrB <span style="">21:58, 5/19/2017

reups 16:49, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth shading/shading depth a little bit? And define shading on the back part of the back leg closest to us and rump?

reups 17:51, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Pinenose (Ro) ~ For Evaluation
First time doing this, so hopefully I got everything right :D Pinenose is one of my favorities warriors!! The shading is supposed to be lessed blurred and more sharper kind of? Comments? Cosmokitten (talk) 20:40, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Don't align your images, it messes up the structure of the page. I removed them, but next time you can remove them by going into source mode and removing the word 'left' or 'right' in the image name. 20:46, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 20:47, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if you have added highlights or not, but she looks gray, not black. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:ErmineGlow/Sig&#125;&#125; (talk) 21:05, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is this how I upload? Did you guys notice changes in ear pink and stuff? Also, Ermineglow I did use highlights, so I lowered them down. :) Cosmokitten (talk) 21:11, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

if you're uploading with the same file name and overwriting the previous one? yes, that's hwo you upload. 21:14, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is it showing now? Idk if it did before, but I see what you mean David, thank you! Cosmokitten (talk) 21:17, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

The file name needs to be Pinenose.rogue.png 21:24, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It should be Pinenose.rogue.png now. c: Cosmokitten (talk) 21:28, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

It actually says 'rouge' :P 21:29, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

If I may ask, where do you see just the 'rogue' part? Cosmokitten (talk) 21:35, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

? You misspelled rogue in the file name as 'rouge'. I'm not quite sure what you mean 21:37, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

OH omg, thank you. French for red, must have missed that! Thanks sm, great eyes! Lol. Cosmokitten (talk) 21:38, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Either your upload isn't showing up for me, but isn't this Skt's image? It shows his version of the image and not yours for me :P I probably sound really dumb <span style="">21:45, 5/18/2017

^^ I believe this is caused because you didn't select to replace the existing image. When reuploading, you need to replace the image with your own 21:46, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Hm.. it won't let me go to the visual page because it says it has complex coding? But I understand where you're coming from! I didn't mean too. --Cosmokitten (talk) 21:50, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading. <span style="">21:57, 5/18/2017

Re-uploaded. Does it show changes? I had to do it in the source editing, not visual because of complex coding. --Cosmokitten (talk) 22:07, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Just a tip, you can also reupload at File:Pinenose.rogue.png by clicking replace. I believe this is the way you're actually supposed to do it, and it makes it so you don't have to remove and readd the image 500 times 22:28, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Smooth out the shading a little bit? Branchwing (talk) 23:16, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I did do the replace thing this time Danny, and thanks! I hope it changed? I smoothed out the shading a bit, I just want it a little sharp for my preference, but if you want me smooth it out more, no problem. I messed with the face shading too. Is it too dark? And thanks Branchwing! --Cosmokitten (talk) 00:21, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Messed with muzzle/face shading again. --Cosmokitten (talk) 00:24, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

This is looking nice, maybe define the light source on the legs? 00:48, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Should I define some more? Cosmokitten (talk) 00:58, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

This is amazing for your first image! Define shading depth on the legs a tad? 16:46, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you Shypaw! Cosmokitten (talk) 00:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading because it kind of bothered me. I like this one a lot better. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:26, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the back legs? 14:47, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 23:49, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Skunkpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Fail.

Very pretty! Maybe define the shading a bit, and there is a little white speck on ---> shoulder blade from the white on the chest. And maybe smudge the ear pink a little more? Keep up the good work! Cosmokitten (talk) 00:44, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white <span style="">00:44, 5/19/2017

If I'm correct, the white on the <-- paw should cover all of it. 00:46, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be white on the stomach as per the StarClan image? <span style="">01:24, 5/19/2017

re-up Thanks Cosmo!

Oh dang I forgot about the earpink. I'll get to it later

Maybe blur the white or smooth it out on the stomach and chest. Looks too sharp compared to the StarClan <span style="">04:19, 5/19/2017

re-up

Could you smooth it out ever more? Not the white you smudged apart, but the white on the chest just looks like a strip of color. <span style="">17:12, 5/20/2017

I'll just ask Sziri how they did it, otherwise I'll just fail that.

re-up Hopefully it looks better now.

Perhaps define the shading depth a little? 15:00, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Also I realized that the nose wasn't filled in.

Can you define shading a little more and smooth it on the back leg closest to us?

Brighten the chest white; looks grayish

re-up may or may not have reupped before.

Daisytoe (A) ~ For Approval
Disneytoe's my last image before I become a warrior! Go go go! --

Good job Neon! Maybe define the eye depth, unless there is some already. Cosmokitten (talk) 10:18, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Decided that even though there was depth that it needed some definition. Fixed. --

Define the shading a bit? I like this, good job! Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:55, May 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smooth/smudge the shading on the top of the hindleg closest to us and the base of the tail. 13:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit, it looks flat. 19:35, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like all the shading could be smoothed out tbh <span style="">19:48, 5/19/2017

I believe the mickey mouse head on the chest is facing the wrong way. On the warrior and kit image, the head is facing sideways. This has it facing right side up. The patch on the back should be further up the back near the shoulders and the ears on the mickey head on the haunch need to be smaller. There should also be a tiny patch of gray on the furthest back paw. And I feel like all of the gray could be a tiny bit softer. 20:07, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Define shading depth more. 00:12, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

How's this? It turned out I errored when re-uploading, so my first re-upload was the same image as the first. --

Maybe desaturate the purple? I had the same problem, don't worry, but it seems too light/colorful. Maybe darken in a few ticks? And smooth it out? <span style="">15:47, 5/20/2017

Re-ups --

The shading could be smoothed out on the belly, and > half of the cat overall

Define the shading, the shading depth, define the eye depth, smooth the ear pink. 14:46, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Leafshade (W) - CBA
All colors from her other images, I just gave the shading a red tint. 16:28, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail a tad? Beautiful image! ^^ 19:59, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! I fixed up the shading on the rest of the body too. 20:08, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth tail shading some more? --

Re-uploaded. 02:53, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

The lighter parts look a little lighter/more defined on the kit, which is the first, so could you go and check that? It might be my monitor, but these seem a little duller.

Re-uploaded. 23:22, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Mintfur (SC) (Lo) ~ For Approval
Colorpicked from apprentice image and based the stripes off of that image, plenty of things wrong with this probably (i actually might redo the stripes tbh) Branchwing (talk) 02:33, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes are supposed to be thinner, and go over the entire body, like the queen and warrior. (Hope that makes sense) <span style="">02:52, 5/20/2017

Reuploaded Smudged the stripes instead of blurring them, now. Also made the main color and stripes slightly darker. Branchwing (talk) 01:14, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

This Is really good Branch, maybe dull down the earpink a smidge? It looks a bit to neon Rainbowmistake (talk) 12:42, May 21, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded That was probably a bit more than I needed to, but I think the earpink looks more natural now, so it works. Branchwing (talk) 13:38, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got rid of one pixel of waste. Branchwing (talk) 17:24, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Minor, the tail tip shouldn't be covered by a stripe. 17:26, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 20:07, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear a tad bit thicker on her other images I think 00:19, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just made some of them a bit thicker, mainly the one-pixel thick ones. Branchwing (talk) 01:32, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Bloomheart (Star) - CBA
02:47, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the head shading a bit, omg i love this Rainbowmistake (talk) 02:48, May 20, 2017 (UTC)chat

Re-uploaded 02:51, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading, i can't see the pattern underneath at all.

Gonna be yelled at to stop, but I don't see why you can't see the pattern beneath the shading? I can see the pattern beneath the shading just fine, so maybe it's your screen? Idk, the shading seems like it doesn't have to be lightened at all imo <span style="">15:46, 5/20/2017

I agree with Broken. I can see the pattern underneath the shading as well. 16:43, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Broken, you should be allowed to express your opinion as long as you back it up with reasoning, which you did in this case. And yes, my screen displays things very darkly. I guess it's fine in other people's eyes.

Define the shading depth along the flank a small bit. <span style="">05:08, 5/21/2017

Define the eye depth 13:41, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't want to do too much more with the eye color: all the colors are the same as his other images 22:01, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Blue Whisker (W) ~ CBA
i hate her new pattern :[

Does she have her real;y long whiskers? I can't really tell. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:ErmineGlow/Sig&#125;&#125; (talk) 16:46, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Are the whiskers supposed to be gray? 16:48, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Yes they are described as translucent Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:47, May 20, 2017 (UTC)chat

uh I don't remember, can someone remind me if i need to elongate the whiskers?

Her description doesn't say anything about long whiskers. I don't think i have to. I'm not really sure.

No, you don't have to. The other images have only the original lengths, so this would be the same

I'll just CBA this now 'cause why not

Toadskip (Star) - For Approval
Oh, Christ, I haven't done a charart in so long, so I honestly have no idea if this is good or not. 20:18, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

I like this! Define the shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:58, May 20, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smoothen out the earpink 21:00, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye 21:41, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 22:36, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste by the ---> ear. Pretty kitty! 22:44, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

This is very nice^^ Define the pupil in the <-- eye? <span style="">00:31, 5/21/2017

Uh, the pupil is black and three pixels wide? How am I supposed to define that? 01:59, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Each eye style is different, Broken. I do believe I've seen this eye style in a couple different images before, and I think the only problem you're having is how the color is placed... but eye style is artist's choice, and since this doesn't look cross-eyed, the image is fine as it is. You don't really have a lot of room in <-- eye, so you're extremely limited as to what you can do, and the way it's placed also makes things difficult.

Re-uploaded: I got rid of the waste, but didn't define the eye. 14:30, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define face and chest shading? 23:53, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Also, the white on the legs should go up higher. 23:54, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Did I have too much fun with the tinted shading again? Yes, yes I did. 03:54, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Dull the tint a little bit? The purple tint stands out quite a bit against brown on my screen. Branchwing (talk) 22:01, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Jay (L) - For Approval
I know I'm missing the patchy fur, don't comment on it.

I believe the ---> ear should be white. Unless it is under the shading. 04:39, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't the <--- paw be black? 04:40, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Accidentally mixed up the paw coloring.

Is there a way you could possibly represent her missing teeth? Kinda like Petalfall, maybe have a slightly straight, or frowning look to her mouth? <span style="">05:01, 5/21/2017

You got a redline or something along those lines for what I should do? Because I know nothing about working with these blanks to get that, hence why I didn't bother with it.

Here you are, http://vvcap.com/0MMWBhbMpq3 <span style="">05:20, 5/21/2017

Nettlebreeze (W) - For Approval
I really like making ginger cats, in case no one can tell. 13:27, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Define the earpink? Branchwing (talk) 13:43, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

the stripes on his other images seem to be uh, less smudged?

Re-uploaded. Yeah, I realized that about the stripes and I tried to sharpen them a bit, hope this is a little better. 14:39, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

On the kit and starclan image the paws don't look pale at all, on the other images it's hard to tell, so yeah I don't think the paws are supposed to be pale

Also maybe try blurring stripes a little? They look softer on the other images

Re-uploaded. Well, the apprentice is the first image in the set, and I'm pretty sure the paws are at least partially pale on that and the elder, so I just receded the pale fur a little. 18:43, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the pale chest a bit 18:49, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

I think on the apprentice the paws don't look pale, but the underside of the legs do. 18:52, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:35, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
I waited 4 days, so I pretty sure I can repost this now. ErmineGlow (talk) 15:22, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

If you still have the gray a reddish tint, you need to match it to solid gray to the other images, the shading looks blotchy so smooth it out, define the shading depth, and define the light. 15:42, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I might have to re-do the shading ErmineGlow (talk) 21:41, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

The image is still tinted red, could you please fix that? Smooth out tail shading as well. Branchwing (talk) 21:57, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Should I alter the tint again? ErmineGlow (talk) 23:49, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light abd define the shading depth. 23:52, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Le better? ErmineGlow (talk) 02:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Minnowkit (CotC) (Kit) ~ For Approval
half smudged shading, half blurred  00:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Define the nose color?

I don't really mean to be rude or ignore your comment, but why/how exactly would I have to define it? He's a dark cat so I gave him a dark pink colour and I can't exactly make it bigger or expand it...do you want me to lighten it? I personally think that'd look awkward then, and I purposefully gave him a darker colour, but if others disagree, I can lighten it. :) 00:56, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

I actually meant that i couldn't see any nose color so whoops.

Oh, so I wouldn't have to change anything then? 01:13, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Shyheart (Ki) - For Approval
First image as a warrior, right? 00:16, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and define shading depth, smooth the ear pink. 00:17, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Add stripes. She was described as a tabby <span style="">00:22, 5/22/2017

I don't know if the fur needs to be wavy at all, if not just ignore this. Maybe make it a little browner? It looks kind of yellowish to me. 00:26, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten it, because it seems too dark to be light brown. Also where did it say she was described as a tabby, Broken?

Reuploaded 00:46, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Uhh....I don't think the changes are showing?

Reuploaded I could see the changes fine, but I reuploaded just in case. Also, one reason it may not be showing is because I reuploaded just before I got your first comment, then reuploaded again, but idk. :P 00:53, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little on the face on on the top of the <-- front leg. Looks cute! 01:16, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 01:23, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define/expand the shading on the ---> front leg. 02:01, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Deadfoot (E) - For Approval
Something easy. <span style="">00:37 Mon May 22

Smooth the shading a little bit. I don't know if it's just my screen, but I feel like it could be lightened a little bit as well. Also, would his twisted paw be visible on this blank? Branchwing (talk) 01:06, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Tumblekit(Star) - Declined
Something easy. I've just had it sitting around for a while. Note:There are highlights, and I tried my best to match the kit. Comments for Tumblekit? <span style="">01:20, 5/22/2017

He doesn't get an image? Pretty sure 01:20, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Just figured that out. Somebody decline this please. <span style="">01:22, 5/22/2017

No proof of when he died and what rank he was. No image. Declined. I don't know who keeps adding his name to the charart list, but they need to stop doing so.