Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Talltail- For approval


Look everyone! My first real charcat!!! Let me know if it has issues, I shaded him and everything!! I want this charcat to be approved. Hawkfire Rock and roll all nite! 15:42, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, first of all, I changed the section to Talltail, since that was his warrior name, and as we'll be seeing him in Bluestar's Prophecy as a warrior it will work. Now, the black patches on him need to a color-slightly-lighter-than-black, because then it just goes with the lineart. Lighten the black, and then we'll go from there. Also, if you're still using Paint, I would highly recommend getting GIMP or using pixlr. -- Bramble My Realm 17:34, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Bramble's right. For some idea of what an approved black and white cat should look like take a look at Crowfrost, smallkit or toadkit (approved images). That's the standard we need before approval  Sandy Talk! 15:21, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

His eye looks like he's sinister; perhaps this could be changed?--Yai-Girl 16:30, 5 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

He looks like he popped right out of Pokemon. Give him less of an angry-japanese look. G B 57 16:51, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay, Okay. I redid him. Does he look any better? Hawkfire My Den 17:03, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Why are his feet black?--Yai-Girl 17:48, 6 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

He is better, but I would suggest a black patch on his foreleg coming up to his chest, and lighten the black even more. You also need to blur the transition between black and white on all the places. Some more shading is needed, too. Keep it up, and he'll be approved in no time. And Yai, I'm presuming his paws are black cause he's a black and white cat. -- Bramble My Realm 17:54, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

I smudged him, added more shading, and added that patch Bramble wanted. Comments? Hawkfire My Den 18:22, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

What's with all the tiny black dots? And try blurring instead if smudging. Sand wich  989  19:13, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? :) And I have no idea how those black dots get there sandwich, I set it to png but they wont go away! Hawkfire My Den 19:37, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

I don't see the black dots anymore. I think you just add shading and blend it in and it will look good. Sand wich  989  22:29, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

I did blend, and I did add shading. I just brightened the shading to make it a silvery color. Anything else? Hawkfire My Den 13:19, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

The black needs to be a lot lighter, and I think in places it goes outside the lineart. -- Bramble My Realm 19:06, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

I don't see anyn shading. But I would do is make the blur tool brush big enough so half of it can be on the black and half of it can be on the white and just run it until the black and white stops. Do that where there is all black and white next together. Sand wich  989  19:57, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? Hawkfire My Den 20:02, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Make the black slightly lighter than what you have now so you can see the lineart. And it still needs more shading and the patches need blending. Your doing great. =)--Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 20:29, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

I found the perfect shade of black! I added more shading, and I added more blending, is it better? Hawkfire My Den 14:27, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

This is the best yet, and it is a great shade of black. The shading is too pronounced, though, it needs to be more blurred and less standoutish. -- Bramble My Realm 14:35, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? I blurred the shading Hawkfire My Den 12:17, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Better, yes, but put a little bit of the normal black color between the shading and the white on that patch in the middle of his back. His ear pink also needs to be blended more into the pelt. -- Bramble My Realm 19:36, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? Reuploaded. Hawkfire My Den 19:34, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

The patches looks smudge inches into the pelt in some places and not blended at all. And I suggest making it a shade darker than pure white.--Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 20:20, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Like this? Hawkfire My Den 12:57, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Yes! Add some more shading on the chest and possible the muzzle and I think he'll be ready. Perhaps blend the ear pink a little too.  Sandy Talk! 13:36, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Will this work? Hawkfire My Den 02:28, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

You don't think that you could possibly blend in the shading more? The line between non-shading and shading is still rather distinctive. -- Dawnfeather talk! 13:37, 15 July 2009 (UTC)


 * There also looks like a smudge spot near the base of his tail, but on his back.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 17:13, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

This looks great, Hawkfire. I'd suggest you lighten the shading, though. And the black is too dark. I would use the same black as Crowfeather or maybe Nightcloud. Sparrowsong 21:20, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hawkfire My Den 21:25, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

The patches need blended more. Look at Patchfoot, Smallkit, and other patched cats for reference. --Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 23:23, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? Hawkfire My Den 16:57, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments? Hawkfire My Den 21:42, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Again, the ear is the problem here. You need to sort it in the same way as you need to sort Jumpfoot's Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:31, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Wow, Hawkfire, this looks really good! But the ear pink needs to be lighter and more triangular. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:IceBlue; background:violet; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:IceBlue;"> Sparrowsong ( talk! ) 17:25, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

darken shading. -- MU MB LE 785  23:43, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please work on this or it will be declined. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:27, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Oh sorry Sandy!! Um..Well to make a long story short, my laptop has the same virus GB's cpu does, and its very bad. So I havent been on my laptop in awhile, which it has all my charart on it. And also, all the computers I have tried, I can't get access to Pixlr, so now I am using my brother's laptop (the same kind of laptop) while mine is getting fixed. Anyway I fixed the ear, and darkened the shading. Hawkfire Go Aggies! 14:18, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

He seems a little too dark, I can barely se the outline. Also shouldn't both he and Tallstar have the same markings?--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 18:10, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Duskfur (W)- For Approval


Okay, I wanted to try a tabby, so I did Duskfur of Riverclan. I was so mad because I finished it, saved it wrong, and then was unable to reopen and resave it, so I had to redo the entire picture. So much trouble for a cat. -.- Improvement tips? Silver tree  ♥  21:38, 10 July, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby marks look like they were made with water colors, you can see through them and they looked liquidy. There also needs to be some more of them, slightly smaller and more thin. -- Bramble My Realm 17:42, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated. I re-did all the stripes. Are they opaque enough? Silver tree  ♥  16:57, 11 July, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, much better. You just need to add a stripe on her haunch near the tail, where that gap is, and <S>also add a marking by her eye. She looks awesome now. -- Bramble My Realm 21:49, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Never mind the eye comment. -- Bramble My Realm 21:50, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated Added the tabby mark. Anything else? Silver tree  ♥  18:11, 11 July, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the tabby markings more and make them more subtle.MinnowclawMinnowclaw

The ear looks shrunk. Little more ear pink, please. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 17:38, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated' Fixed the ear and blended the tabby marks.

The markins are very dark - try lightening them a little and then blending them slightly more so they look more natural. Also, the ear pink is too fluro and needs to be more triangle shaped (make sure you blend though). [ps. please sign with four ~s] <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 10:01, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Your need to BLEND a lot more on the tabby marking and shading.Minnowclaw 23:23, 14 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I really hate to do this but this hasn't been worked on for a while either, almost a whole week I believe since Silvertree's last posted wasn't stamped I can't really tell. I give it a 24 hour notice before it shall be declined for good.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 18:26, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated So sorry, I forgot to edit when I was busy with something else for another website. I blended the marks some more. Silver tree  ♥  21:28, 20 July, 2009 (UTC)

Your image isn't showing up. Please upload the right image, Silvertree :) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:29, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay, there we go. I had forgotten to upload it (like a smart person.) Silver  tree  ♥  18:59, 22 July, 2009 (UTC)

The markings nede to be slightly lighter as they stand out a lot. Also, make the ear pink more triangular, lighter and bkend it in. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:25, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Bland markings. Highlight. -- MU MB LE 785  23:42, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Also, the ear pink needs to be bigger. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 01:58, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with GB, but other then that I think she's georgus. --Spottedwing 13:57, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated okay, I made them more blended in I had trouble getting satisfied with the eahink I got it. Next? Silver tree  ♥  20:21, 26 July, 2009 (UTC)

The ear still seems a bit... round. Add some more color to it then blend. --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 15:31, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Updated Better? Silver tree  ♥  18:31, 29 July, 2009 (UTC)

Yes. Something about the tabby stripes is annoying me though. Make them lighter and try varying the length of them more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:33, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

There should be markings on the further foreleg.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 18:49, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Tallstar(Le)- For approval
Comments?--Yai-Girl 14:41, 16 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Very good. =) Maybe tone the ear pink a shade lighter, blend the black patches, and add shading.--<font face="Comic Sans MS" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Comic Sans MS" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 15:33, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Good, just do all the things above, and make the eye amber (orange) because it's yellow and he has amber eyes. Hawkfire My Den 21:33, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

He looks more really dark brown then he does black. That may just be my computer though.--: LST DragonClan's Camp 00:03, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

He looks good, but he has no shading. --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 03:35, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

I added shading, made the ear pink lighter, made the eyes amber, and blurred the black. Anything else?--Yai-Girl 15:00, 17 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl


 * I can only see shading on the back and tail. He could use some on his hind legs.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 15:50, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, I can barley see it. Also, add some shading on the hid leg.Minnowclaw 17:00, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Better?--Yai-Girl 04:28, 18 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

(M) - The tendril on the nose looks strange. Try widening it at the bottem and then gradually thinning it out. Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 19:10, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Moss, and I also think the shading needs to be blurred a bit. Also add a white pixel by the pupils, for a highlight. -- Bramble My Realm 20:14, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

I forgot how to blend shading again, sorry.--Yai-Girl 04:52, 19 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I looked at the approved leaders. How does he look?--Yai-Girl 05:01, 19 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

To blend shading use the smudge or blur tool and run it across it. Use the dodge tool for shading, but it wont work on white images so make his pelt color just a shade darker than pure white.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:00, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

I changed him, how does he look?--Yai-Girl 15:55, 20 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

dark... his white patches are grey now... Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:22, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

I'd have to agree with Sandy. Overall he's darker. I'd suggest going over it with the dodge tool in some places for brighter highlights to bring it up to near white and possibly making his eyes lighter as well? -- Quiet ! 08:52, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Better?--Yai-Girl 15:37, 21 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

He still needs to be a bit lighter. Just darker than pure white. Also, blend the shading into the pelt. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:18, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Sorry I din´t respond right away I'm on a trip to Spain and I don't want people geting angry becouse I saved lots of chages. So, please don´t delete Tallstar or the Kittypet Blanks.--Yai-Girl 21:51, 23 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I made the pelt a lighter color.--Yai-Girl 15:17, 25 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

The transition between the eyes is sort of an odd shape to me... Could you make it rounder? Other than that, I love him! -- MU MB LE 785  22:58, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Other than that, it's very good. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:IceBlue;"> Jane Volturi ( talk! ) 02:42, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I agree with Sparrow. Also, there are a few white pixles on the black on his left shoulder that you should get rid of. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   20:46, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

The tendril up his nose is a direct rectangle. Make it more like a natural triangle, with blurring. Also, you need to work on your kittypet blanks when you have time. -- Bramble My Realm 23:23, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

When I tried the nose looked strange I don´t think I can do it.--Yai-Girl 14:42, 29 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl



(M) - I drew you a diagram for the nose tendril and white on the shoulder and how to fix the tendril and white. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   22:17, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Brightheart(Ki) - For Approval
I wanted to have a go at a kit. Can anyone tell me how to put shading on a white kit? --Spottedwing 18:12, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

1.) Add shading by taking the brush tool in pixlr.com, choose the 5 brush and change the exposer to 50%. Put the brush when the shding should go and blend.

2.) The patches look to circleish and ovalish. Make them sort of lumpy.

3.) Blend all the patches and ear pink

Do this and it should be good.Minnowclaw 19:41, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw


 * Like Minnowclaw said, fix the patches. No cat has such even markings like this.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 21:14, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Minnowclaw and Shimmer. To put shading on a white cat you need to make sure the cat isn't pure white. Make her slightly greyish so the shading will show up. <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 07:15, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

I finally got her reuploaded. My computer is being slow again. I added shading and redid the patches. What do you guys think? --Spottedwing 21:53, 18 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Try to position the patches like on the queen and warrior versions of her. I thinkIt's nice that you're using a different shade then those, as then they're all different and as ginger changes in the lighting... Also, the eyes are very dark green. Try lightening them like on the warrior and queen versions. Finally, my computer's coming back tommorrow! I can put up Oakheart, Jayfeather, and Crookedstar! --<span style="font:12px Comic Sans MS;display:inline;border:Silver 2px solid;background-color:#6699FF;padding:04px;"> Mal Sorrel-Wolf 12:26, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

This is very good but the ginger splotches need to be more lumpy the one on her head is good though. User:Stonestar 13:47, July 19 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the blotches more lumpy and I added another blotch between her legs. I also made her eyes lighter. --Spottedwing 17:52, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

She needs more shading on the neck, head and left side of her body. Blend the edges of the patches slightly and also the shading. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 09:21, 20 July 2009 (UTC)


 * The shading is really bothering me. Her right forepaw has the regular white while the rest of her is darker and has more shading. Fix this by adding some of the regular white in her. Also blend the patches like Sandy said.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 18:23, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry it took so long. It's fair week and I'm so busy with my animals, that I'm barly at home. I made her white, went over the shading, and tried blending in the blotches. --Spottedwing 02:57, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

It's a good start. Blend the shading just a bit more, though, and add some on the chin. Sparrowsong 03:16, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

P.S. Sorry to be OT, but does anyone know why this page is locked? I don't see why it needs to be.

Yes, she's getting there! Just thicken the shading slightly anf add more under the chin, then blend it all in. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:25, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added shading on her neck. --Spottedwing 02:49, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Please comment --Spottedwing 13:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The spot on her head is still rather round. Also, the two spots on the chest are bothering me; make them more lumpy. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   17:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

The spots look like they've been stuck on... Try making them less regular - more like patches than spots. Also, add shading on her head and thicken all the shading before blending in thoroughly. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:44, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry it took so long. I redid the blotches. --Spottedwing 18:29, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

I left the blotch on her head round, because thats how it is on the Queen virsion. --Spottedwing 17:22, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Hawkfur - For Approval
Another black cat. xD He seems cool, so I did him. Comments?--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 23:16, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

The ear looks...... strange. Try making it more solid, less blending. Only blend the edges of the ear pink, not the whole thing. Also, make the ear pink a hot pink color, sort of like Jumpfoots' I just think it looks tons better hot pink. Hawkfire My Den 00:47, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Try using a color similar to Blackclaw's for the ear pink. Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 00:59, 20 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Better?--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:44, 20 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Much better, but I can hardly see the shading.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 18:28, 20 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 19:53, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Still needs more shading if you ask me. It needs to be thicker. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC)


 * I'm working on it now.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:58, 22 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Better?--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 21:37, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? I'm bored. xD--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:11, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

That bit of shading under the ear looks unnatural. I'd take it away altogether. That's about all I can see. He looks great. -- Bramble My Realm 21:39, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

I took it out.=)--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 22:18, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

darken shading.-- MU MB LE 785  23:50, 24 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Done.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:13, 25 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Anything else?--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 20:30, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I think he's good. Does anyone else have anything? -- Bramble My Realm 20:56, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

The shading just doesn't look neat. It sits up in places, and is quite uneven and a bit blotchy. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 01:18, 26 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Better?--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 14:27, 27 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Any comments?--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:40, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I can't see anything. Comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:42, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval


I was messing around in the warriors wiki when I found many declined images so I put the Kittypet blanks for approval. Comments?--Yai-Girl 17:17, 20 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Yai, these are Darkhallows' images. You need her permission to edit them, and also, o, Sandiwolf was working on them; they were just taken down due to black of work. -- Bramble My Realm 21:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Oops sorry.--Yai-Girl 15:39, 21 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

These had best be declined then until Darkhallows gives her permission to use the old blanks and until you sort it out with Sandiwolf. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:21, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Yai-girl can use them. I have attempted to revamp them to no avail. Maybe she can.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 17:54, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Alright then, back up for approval. Sandiwolf's were declined, and if she wants them back up, she and Yai can talk it out. There is a chances that one set can be used as rogues and the other as kittypets. (will add criticism when I have time) -- Bramble My Realm 16:00, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Kittypets are well-groomed. The fur on the lond-hairs are sticking out everywhere. I thought you weren't supposed to put cats in drying machines? -- MU MB LE 785  23:48, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Mumble, long-hairs are fluffy, know matter how "well-groomed" they are. Maybe make the hair a tad bit closer to the pelt, though. I love the collars. :)--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:23, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Now, the lineart needs to be thicker, so as it goes with the other images. Instead of the tail being up, it would be better if it was curled around the paws, I think, and the ears need to be shrunk. The paws look slightly awkward too. I found this pic: click You could probably use it for reference. -- Bramble My Realm 20:53, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with everything Bramble. That pic made me laugh though. I would advise you not to make them quite that fat Yai! Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:13, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, hey, they are kittypets. lol but yeah, don't make them that fat Yai. -- Bramble My Realm 23:44, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

I have trouble making the long hairs fluffy can someone help me?--Yai-Girl 14:28, 29 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Hre's another reference: <<That should help you on the fur a little bit. (I know who drew that ^^) and instead of just thickining the outer lineart, try doing it with the inside lines, if that makes sense.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:23, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I did the short hairs, how do they look?--Yai-Girl 19:03, 30 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Looks great, but can you please make them a bit bigger? MaYbe the size of my Loner blanks on the bottom? Besides that I love them! The reason I want them to be bigger, is beacuse it's easier to add shading, blending, and smudging, and so we can see the colors and tabby stripes/dapple even better. Hawkfire ♫  Go Aggies! 22:33, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Owlstar- For Approval
Well, here's my first image; hope it's okay. Constructments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 15:25, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Make the eyes amber, they are yellow.And blend the ear pink, besides that iy looks greats! Hawkfire My Den 16:23, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Hawkfire! The changes haven't been showing up for me, yet, but, I darkened the eye, and tried blending the ear. How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 16:40, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Not bad at all for a first iamge! But you need to add more shading and make the shading you already have darker. (If your using Pixlr.com or Photoshop, use the burn tool.) Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 17:04, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, M&S! I used the Burn Tool on all my shaded areas, then blended it into the pelt. But, I'm not sure where I could add extra shading. I was thinking the back? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any shading whatsoever. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 18:41, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Darkened the shading. Is this better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 19:14, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

No. There's only shading on the tail and leg. Look at the other leader pics to see where you still need shading. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 19:24, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I've been looking off the Sunstar picture for reference. I have shading under the chin, on the forelegs, and the places you mentioned, GB. Do you want me to darken it again? And, would one of the places that need shading be the back? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 19:44, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Sunstar's shading is pretty advanced. Try looking at Lionstar right below this entry for your shading and highlights. Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 20:34, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I extended the shading up Owlstar's back. Is there anywhere else he needs it? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:20, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Better. Try adding some more shading on the right side of his face and the left side of his chest. Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 21:38, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Like this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:44, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Yup! Just blur all of the shading in as much as you can and he'll look great!Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 22:57, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Tried blurring the shading. Anything else? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 23:09, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Nice first image. You need to add thicker shading on the back, legs and tail and add some on the head too. Blend it all in and then blend the ear pink too as it is quite stand-out-ish. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:33, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

As well as blending the ear pink also make it darker. That light of a pink on a gray cat's ear looks really strange, esp. if you picture it in the real world. Make it a lot darker. But I like him otherwise. -- Bramble My Realm 15:50, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

I darkened the ear pink, and thickened the shading. But, it looks a little lumpy to me.... -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 17:06, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I don't think it looks lumpy at all. Could you try to make the ear pink and nose color more like Cloudstar's? Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 22:04, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

I modeled the ear, and nose, off Cloudstar. Is this better? Or, does it need to be darker? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:18, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Personally I'd make a it a bit darker as Owlstar has a darker pelt colour than Cloudstar. Also, blend the shading on the flank more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:01, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

I tried to model the ear pink off some of the approved black cats, and I blended the shading a bit more. Is this better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 14:25, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Blend the front and hind leg shading and add a tad more shading on the head and left side.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:34, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Is this a little better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:21, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

He looks great, except I think he needs a bit more shading on his hindleg, front leg, and back. And maybe some on top of the head. That's all I see. -- Bramble My Realm 21:06, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Sorry for taking so long to respond; it's been a busy week for me. =) Anyway, I tried adding more shading. Is this better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 14:16, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

That's good, but you now need to blend the shading in at the edges. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:09, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

I'm not all that good at this shading stuff. =) But, anyway, I tried to blend it in a bit more. How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:41, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a bit more. Basically just run the blur tool down it about three times. We'll tell you if it's too much. Be careful not to hit the lineart though. -- Bramble My Realm 23:46, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Lionstar - for approval


Here's my 1st leader. Does any one know how to do good highlights like Minnowclaw and Quiet have done on their images? Sand wich  989  19:11, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Wow Sandwich, this looks great. Maybe blend the shading and ear pink a little more, and are his eyes really light blue? And no, I do not know how to add highlights like that. Ask them yourself! :) Hawkfire My Den 22:12, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Hawkfire on blending the shading. It took a while for me to find out what you meant by highlights, but I don't use them. I have no clue what quiet does, but if you mean what I did with Thunderstar, I go to www.pixlr.com and use the dodged tool for shading and highlights. Hope I helped!Minnowclaw 22:39, 22 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Make the eyes amber as it is a generic colour unless you can find a reference for blue eyes. Take the shading away from the top edge of the tail and add some on the neck and left side of his face. Then blend all the shading more. Highlights aren't strictly necessary but if you do want to add them then use the dodge tool. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:32, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Made eyes amber, fixed tail, and fixed shading. Sand wich  989  19:13, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I think what Snady meant is to still have the shading along the bottem of the tail, just not on the top. Also, there are two white dots toward the outside of the eyes that aren't highlights that need to be taken out. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   01:16, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I made you a diagram for shading. Where I circled in blue, I think you should put some shading. Other that that, This is a REALLY good image! Diagram: -- MU MB LE 785  20:38, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Fixed everything. Sand wich  989  21:49, 26 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Sandwich...you should have kept the shading you had and added in the shading spots mumble suggested.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 22:05, 26 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Sorry, I added it now. Sand wich  989  07:56, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

It's in the right places now, but you need to blend it in at the edges... Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:12, 27 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Ok, did that. Sand  wich  989  23:49, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

The shading on his right cheek is too thick. Blur it a lot or take some away. Or both. -- Bramble My Realm 23:43, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

There's also some blurry lineart around his hind legs and the join where they meet the front legs. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 09:18, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I really hate to do this but I can't find the color I was usign for the fur, so I'm gonna withdraw. Sand wich  989  19:08, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, after a very convincing argument by Mosswhisker, consider this un withdrawn. Sand wich  989  21:16, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Glad to hear it. :) Make the shading slighly thinner on the left side of his face. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   20:04, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Pad - For Approval
You've been waiting for him, so here he is. Criticism is welcome. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 18:15, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks good. Cute. -- Bramble My Realm 19:40, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could you make the ear pink more triangular, darken the shading and add shading under the chin? Other then that he looks great! Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 21:54, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Actually, M&S, if you looked at just about every pair of ears on our kit pics, you'd see that they're not triangular. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 22:22, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Good point. Never mind. Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 23:26, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

But, M&S has a point on the shading under the chin. You would need to make it darker.Minnowclaw 10:59, 24 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

He looks super cute, but maybe tone down the ear pink a shade because it looks a very unnatural bright color.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:38, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 22:17, 24 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Cutie, but darken the shading just a tad.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 00:19, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little more. Also, the shading needs to be slightly darker. Good job, GB. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:IceBlue;"> Jane Volturi ( talk! ) 20:30, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

He's very cute! The only thing would be if you could darken his eyes just a little bit. He looks great!!!-- MU MB LE 785  20:40, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

How's that? Also, Mumble, I want to keep the eyes bright, to make him look all cute and innocent. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 00:42, 26 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Any comments before 24-hour approval?-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 15:53, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could you curve the neck shading downward just a smidge? It's almost a straight line right now. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   17:52, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

tadpole- for approval
ok, since scourge didn't work out, i made an easier one:tadpole. how did i do? rainpelt

add/darken shading... -- MU MB LE 785  23:46, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Add a tad bit of shading under the chin, head, sides, and lightly on the pars. Blend the ears some more and there's a darker line of pink running through it. Lighten the eyes, as they are hazel, and add a highlight to them. He looks very cute. =)--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:20, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Also, judging by what you said on Scourge you are using paint, right? Try using www.pixlr.com to edit your images. (Use the burn tool for shading and the blur tool for ...blurring.) ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;">  MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   00:33, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

ok, i used gimp to fix shading.-rainpelt


 * I can hardly see the shading and there's a part gray background..Theres look like some gray near his left foreleg close to the line art. There's also some near his ears and where his two paws meet his chest.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 01:40, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

i added shading and lightened the eyes and i have fixed the background rainpelt

i worked on shading more, and made the BG transparent, if it dosent show up for you guys tell me. and i also noticed the line art was lightened when i was doing shading, so i fixed that problem, have i fixed it all? rainpelt worked on shading and ears more, no comments in a while, so, i dont know what to do next.

Well, he needs shading on the other side of his body, his front legs and top of head, and your current shading needs to be blurred in more. There's also an extra bit of gray stuck in between the tail and side, get rid of that. -- Bramble My Realm 02:08, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

fixed. rainpelt


 * It looks like you smudged it more than you blurred.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 15:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

blurred instead of smudged


 * The little picks of gray are still there in between the paws and his hind leg.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 22:06, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

did that, and lightened the ears. rainpelt

The shading needs to be blurred into the pelt, to make it look more natural, and less like patches. Plus, he's supposed to be black. Right now, he looks more like a dark gray. Maybe make him a little darker. Other then that, good! Jaypaw189 21:21, 30 July 2009 (UTC) aka Jayie

Nightstar(Le) for Approval


Have I posted this twice? Dunno... But, I'm sorry, to those who saw, about my blow up last night. I was having a bad day, but I'm sorry, and I'm staying. Anywho, I did Scourge. I hope he looks ok, and will he be able to have a chance at being accepted? I don't know if I used the right blank... -- MU MB LE 785  20:22, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, this won't be accepted. It's good, but Scourge is considered a rogue. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:IceBlue;"> Jane Volturi ( talk! ) 20:24, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Too true as Scourge, but this image is awesome and I would hate it to go to waste. Mumble, no one is currently working on Nightstar; you can take away the collar and change the eyes amber. You could go with either Nightstar, or you could lighten it and make it Swiftstar of WindClan. Your choice. Also, I am glad you are staying. :) You have great talent. -- Bramble My Realm 20:37, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! And I'll change him to nightstar. ;) -- MU MB LE 785  20:42, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

The transition is complete... IT'S ALIVE!!! xD Jk. It's just nightstar. Suggestions? -- MU MB LE 785  20:57, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Technically Nightstar's dead. ;) He looks great, except I think the shading on the right side of his face (our left) is a bit too thick, as well as under his neck. -- Bramble My Realm 21:04, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

xD Ok, I'll fix it. -- MU MB LE 785  21:46, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I fixed it! -- MU MB LE 785  22:49, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

ear color should be a shade or two lighter, in my opinion. rainpelt

I don't know about that, rainpelt. He is a black cat, and it might look unnatural that bright...-- MU MB LE 785  01:38, 26 July 2009 (UTC)


 * His ear color is fine or you could make it darker. Either way, make some of his black fur be smudged/blurred around the pink. Black cats ears don't always show up being so brightly because of their fur. Another thing blend in the highlight in his chest area.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 04:02, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Fixed! ;) -- MU MB LE 785  19:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I think he's a bit too dark. Can you lighten him a bit so the shading and features show up more? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:07, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Pinestar - For Approval
This is Pinestar, leader of ThunderClan, father of Tigerstar, and kittypet.

eyes should be green, bit more shading, other than that, very goodrainpelt

Your really god at making charcats!It's awesome,but as rainpelt and mumble said,add alittle more shading,then he'll be perfect!I like his green eyes,there like the color of the leaves in Green-leaf! --Firepelt 02:29, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

OMG! It's awesome! But, add some more shading, like rainpelt said. ;) If you need to, you can look at my nightstar (above) or one of the finished leaders. :) (And don't forget to sign your name with the four squigle-things (~)! -- MU MB LE 785  22:54, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

All it said was that he was a reddish-brown tabby tom. Nothing about all this extra stuff you put up. It's, good, but I think you need to change it.Minnowclaw 23:17, 25 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Perhaps take the black markings away and make them slightly darker red, and add more stripes. Also, the lineart is still blurred. As I said before, I can fix this for you if need be. -- Bramble My Realm 02:46, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I changed the eyes to green, like you said, Rainpelt. I don't remember it saying anything about him being a tabby, but if you look at page 144 in Code of the Clans, you will see a pic of Pinestar's head. It has the same markings I have drawn on him. That'd be great, Bramble, but could u wait untill it is ready to be approved? Jaypaw189 19:52, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

He's just a red-brown tom, so he doesn't need tabby marks. But the markings on his eyes can stay, just make them a darker brown color instead of black; black sticks out too much. And sure, I can wait until it just needs that done, and then it can be approved. -- Bramble My Realm 23:28, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble. I made them dark brown, like you asked. Any other changes you need? Jaypaw189 00:07, 29 July 2009 (UTC) aka Jayie

Take away the black lines around the dark brown markings, and blur them a bit. That way they look less sharply defined and more natural. -- Bramble My Realm 00:32, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Alright, I blurred it like you asked. Jaypaw189 17:10, 30 July 2009 (UTC) aka Jayie

The outline is blurred a little.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 18:32, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I finally got the new version to show up! I know, Bramble said she'd (or he'd) fix that for me when it's ready to be approved. Jaypaw189 20:06, 30 July 2009 (UTC) aka Jayie

Redtail-for Approval

 * Well before I have to leave Monday, I wanted to upload the first deputy we ever met, Redtail. I gave him amber eyes since they never gave any information about his eyes, plus to me it seemed to fit him better than green and blue was just yucky..So here he is. I gave his tail a darker ginger since he was best known for it and I think he inherited from his mother Swiftbreeze since she is known for her red tail too. Comments anyone?-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 05:15, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Ooooh I like this one. The thing i see is on the right foreleg, try blending more in between the two colors. Sand wich  989  07:48, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Nice job!As sandwich said,try blending more between colors,other than that,no flaughts are visable to me!Kepp up the good work! --Firepelt 02:24, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

His body is great and looks like a perfect tortie should look, but his tail is way too red. It actually looks crimson. Try making it just a darker shade of his ginger coloured body fur. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:03, 26 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Here we are. I used a tortie picture for reference when I was making him since its my first shot at making one. I think I got the color of the tail down this round.Man..I've realized I've come a long way from just my first pixel Squirrelfight...O.o The changes isn't showing up for me....so I hope they show up later because it is when you look at the recent uploads-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 16:44, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Now it shows up ^_^ comments?...so it can get more attention Updated-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 03:54, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

lol. I changed the file name as rainpelt uploaded a leader pose over it... the file name would have been changed anyway in keeping with the others. I think this looks much better. I'll have another look in a minute and may post again :) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:04, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks good. Does anyone else have anything? -- Bramble My Realm 00:02, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Ravenpaw - for approval


Heres my first go at an apprentice blank. I unsuccesfully added highlights but I left them there so you can tell me if there good. It's the Thunderclan one btw. Sand wich  989  07:46, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful. Can I suggest that you darken the shading a tiny bit, not so that it looks dramati, just so it is a tiny bit more visible. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:00, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Also maybe blend the ear pink a small bit more.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 20:15, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - He needs a pupil and highlight in his eye. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   21:57, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Darkened shading a little, fixed eye, blended in ear more. Sand wich  989  23:14, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

It's a great image, but I don't think it's needed. Thrushpelt is never shown as an apprentice, is he? If you'd do his warrior self that would be better. -- Bramble My Realm 23:38, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

How about if this gets approved, I will immediately do his warrior. Since we are trying to get all pixels for all cats. Sand wich  989  01:03, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I dunno... if he was never shown as an apprentice or mentioned as one then we shouldn't really do the image. That's like assuming he actually was one - he could have been a rogue joined immediately as a warrior - okay it's unlikely but I don't think we should take that liberty as to assume his history. Perhaps you could make it into a different cat with a similar description. I'll have a think and see who it could possibly be. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:56, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I changed it. ;(. Sand wich  989  18:51, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Cloudspots (Med Cat) - For Approval
I've had him sat on my cp for what seems like a very long time waiting to be put up :) Here he finally is! Constructments? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:33, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

ears need to show up a bit more, in my opinion. other than that, it looks awesome!

This looks great, Sandy! The only things I can see are to darken the ear pink and to lighten the shading. I can't see the back feet the shading is so dark! :) Hawkfire My Den 15:49, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Sandy,cloudspot's is awesome,and as hawky said,darken the ear pink,and lighten the shading,other than that,if you fix it a bit more,awesome! --Firepelt 17:58, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Okay. I darkened the ear pink and lightened the whole image so the shading was less prominent. I can't do much with 'fix it up a bit more' Firepelt as I don't know what that means but thanks for the great compliments! lol Anything else? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:01, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Bring the white on the ear out a bit more, and move the pink inside the ear a bit more. Right now it's over the transition between black and white, and it looks odd. Also add some more specks on his tail. He looks great otherwise though. -- Bramble My Realm 23:40, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I extended the white on the ear and added a bit between his ears as it looked really strange without it. I added more spots on his tail.and moved the ear pink. Think I got it everything. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:04, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The part where the white on the ear connects with the black looks too round. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   19:08, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Ki) - For Approval


I hope this cat is okay.I used www.pixlr.com.I tried my best in doing the outline in the sides,but i tihnk i need a way more darker color.she has tabby stripes on her pelt,and they are darker than the ginger colored pelt.I hope squirrelkit(squirrelflight) is okay!I had anotherimage of squirrelkit,but the paw was way to blurred,so i tried to slvge what i could of it and otouch it up a bit --Firepelt 03:10, 26 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

She's pretty good, Fire. Her tabby stripes are a little messy, though, I'd look at some of Sandy's approved kit pics; they have awesome tabby stripes. Also, move her pupils down to the bottom of her eyes, and add a white pixel above the pupils for highlights, to make her look alive. Also, remember to add shading. Last of all, blur the edge of her white paw, and take away the black line separating her ginger fur from the white. --Bramble My Realm 03:13, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

The lineart on her white paw shows blurred to me...-- ♪Shimmer♫ 04:00, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I've made you a diagram. The blue stripes are where your tabby stripes need to be, and when you've added them, using the same color you have the current stripes, blur them a bit. The red circles are where you need to add darker shading; use the burn tool (white-gloved hand) for that. And the green circles are where you need to take out those black lines across the ears, and shrink the pink and put in some ginger around it, like the other approved images. Also, change the eyes like I have them changed. At the moment, her eyes look wonky and twisted. --Bramble My Realm 02:32, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Thx bramble,I touched her up,burned her stripes,and deleted the old one's and put new ones in,i added darker ginger shading like brownish to her and deleted the black line at the ears. --Firepelt 18:03, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Better but not there yet. The ear pink needs to be much smaller and blended in (look at some approved kits for reference. Mintkit, Fallowkit and Ivykit for example although there are many others) Then sort out the eyes as she looks cross-eyed (again looking at approved kits for guidance will help greatly). She needs more shading on her neck and sides and you need to extend it into the pelt and blend well to lessen the transition. Then make sure she's not blurry as I can see some blurred lineart that's giving her a fuzzy look :) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:19, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Your getting there! Her tabby stripes need to be more thicker and blended a little more. The linart is also blurred to me. Hawkfire My Den 15:58, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Stop moving the section! And the pictures, for that matter. All you have to do is upload the new version of the image, then edit this section saying you've updated. No need to move the section, pics, or anything. You've made all our sigs dead somehow. -- Bramble My Realm 01:05, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I've moved this back to join the rest of the section - we do not need duplicates of your approval section on the page Firepelt. Just leave it where it is and comment from there. There's no need for anyone to be moving sections unless they are a senior warrior archiving. I put Bramble's comment in at the bottom but the rest was all duplicate so I just kept one lot. (ps. I think the sigs become dead when you copy from the saved page and not from the editing box). All you need to do is follow the guidelines for improvement and then leave a message in this section when you've done them (remembering to upload the new version). Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:21, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Harespring - for approval
Here's Harespring, my first Charart ever. He's probably not that good, but... well... comments?--<span style="color:Silver;background:Aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Echomist <font color="Salmon" style="background:Aqua">Lilydapple 00:49, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - This is really good! The only thing that strikes me is the eye; it needs to have more color to it. Look at some of the other approved warrior eyes for examples. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   01:07, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

This is really good for your first ever charart Echo. I would suggest looking at some approved warriors for help with the highlighting and pupil in the eye and also make the white a very very pale grey instead so that the shading shows up. Add shading on the curve of the hind leg, chest, head and bottom edge of the tail. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:04, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Yes, this is pretty good for your first charart. But you need to darken the shading a bit - I can hardly see it. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:silver; background:black; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:IceBlue;"> Sparrow ( song ) 20:55, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed the eye, and I'm trying to make the shading look more natural, but I'm not that good at it. Anyway, is it better?--<span style="color:Silver;background:Aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Echomist <font color="Salmon" style="background:Aqua">Lilydapple 17:48, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - For shading, I use the burn tool (If you don't have this tool, go to www.pixlr.com) Then go up to brushes, click on size 20 to 30 (depending on what area you're shading),and put the hardness at 0. Then just run it over the areas you need to shade about 2 to 3 times. Hope that helps! ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   20:35, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Moss! I used the burn tool, just the way you said, and I think he's better.<span style="color:Silver;background:Aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Echomist <font color="Salmon" style="background:Aqua">Lilydapple 21:07, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

The white parts look kind of green... Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:36, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The shading's better. Could you add some under the chin and on his back? ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   18:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I re-did the image, fixing the "green" parts so that they looked white, adding shading to the chin and back... but for some reason it's not showing the updated version. This is weird...--<span style="color:Silver;background:Aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Echomist <font color="Salmon" style="background:Aqua">Lilydapple 21:55, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Re-doing old Charart?
(M) - I have a suggestion to Bramble and the senior warriors. I think we should redo some of the old Charart. You see, the standards of the project were not as high back then, so we have many cats without shading, eye colors, or ear pink. If the person who made that charart is still part of the project today, they could redo their own image. Otherwise, I think we should redo the old images; we already redid Ferncloud, after all. We could still have the old charats under the chacter pixel section. After all, isn't the project's job to get high-quality images for every warrior cat? It's just a suggestion, but I think we should look into it.

P.S. Some pixels that we might want to redo are:


 * Tawnypelt - Whiskers and nose are colored in. No ear pink. No visable shading. Eye is messed up.


 * Brambleclaw - Eye needs pupil and highlight in it.


 * Weaselfur - Eye needs color. Ear pink is almost non-existant.


 * Feathertail - Eye needs color. Lineart is extremly blurred.


 * Brownpaw - Eye needs pupil and highlight. Markings need to be slightly lighter and blurred more. Ear pink needs to be easier to see.

₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   20:25, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree. I always wondered why the Tawnypelt pic was approved (no offense)(at all). Because it's like we have an apprentice blank of her with white orange and black blank. Then we have a black and brown one with yellow whisker with green eyes in and outside of the eye lineart. So anyway I agree we can tweak the images. Sand wich  989  22:53, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Definitely, Moss. You beat me and Dawn to putting the idea up. :) Also, all of us should also be able to redo our own images that we aren't happy with. As we've improved over time, our first images don't look as good to us as they did. I know I want to redo Cloudtail, and Brightheart. Any other comments, members? -- Bramble My Realm 23:16, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

K, will archive this soon. If a user wants to do one of these, put on their current projects list, something like: Weaselfur(NV) which is new version. Is ther anything else? Speak now or hold your peace. -- Bramble My Realm 00:02, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I can redo my Brownpaw.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 03:32, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I have a question! Which images are we actually redoing? Is it specific ones or can any user redo any image? Do users have to ask permission of the original artist before redoing the image if they're still an active member of the project or are we just going to have images redone just because people feel like it. What are the requirements of an image classifying for having to be redone as I feel that a lot of the images we have are perfectly adequate. Sorry if this seems like a lot of questions, but I have a lot of unanswered ones lol Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:25, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Oh, also, do these count as part of the 3 on the current projects list or are they in addition? How many can one user take on if they are in addition? Perhaps we should have a week or something where active users have the oppertunity to tweak some of their own old images, once the page has died down a little... I dunno. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:28, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I have some suggestions for what Sandy said.

1. We should redo old images that are missing important things (Such as ear pink.) Perhaps people should check with Bramble and the senior warriors before redoing an image.

2. I'd say if the origional artist is still part of the project, we should get their permission first. If they are no longer on the wiki, then we don't need permission.

3. As mentioned above, iamges that are missing things like shading an ear pink. We should probably check with Bramble and the senior warriors before redoing an image or post a list of images that need redone. If it's your image, then you can redo without permission. (I'd like to redo my own Boulder, because I can do much better now.)

4. I'd say each user can redo one old image or their own that they are no longer satified with at a time. And I think it should count as part of the 3 images you can do. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   18:35, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Featherwhisker(MC) - For Approval
Here is my Featherwhisker, inspired by Shaf-Girl's new biography of Pinestar including Featherpaw. A whole new look on him makes me want to make his image. Comments/criticism? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 07:18, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - As usual, I see nothing wrong. Great job! ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   20:38, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong eaither.i agree with moss&stealth.Keep up the good work =^._.^= --Firepelt 23:25, 29 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

As usual, det är häftigt. ;) Basically Moss's echo. Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 00:53, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

This looks great as usual. Underneath the ear there is a bit where the shading stops rather abruptly - can you blend it in a little? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:29, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Loner Blanks- For approval
Here are my first blanks, constructments? And also, I know the tails are suckish, please tell me how to fix them! Hawkfire My Den 15:40, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Blossomkit(TC)(KI)-for approval... again
Darkhallows is back... sort of. My computer is pretty much a goner, so I'm currently using my other computer. Which is in the basement. I'ts a little slow, but whatever. --<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 03:07, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

This shouldn't be up for approval for long Shady. As far as I remember, the only problem was with her right ear - it needs to show up more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:30, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

It wasn't the ear pink, it was the black running under it. Is she better now?--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 18:37, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - For Approval
Finally up! Now who shall I do?....--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 03:26, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

The white looks a little... yellow.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 14:44, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

The join where the grey meets the white near the base of the tail is at an odd angle - it seems rather abrupt. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:33, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I changed it, but it's not showing up yet...--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 18:43, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The haunch has a little bit of white on the gray part. ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   19:16, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Nightpelt (W) for approval


Okay, I hope that the ear pink is finally alright. --Nigthflight 04:22, 30 July 2009 (UTC)


 * The ear pink needs to show more. Make it a brighter color. Not like a hot pink, but a dark red/pink color.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 14:40, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Hoping this is okay! --Nigthflight 21:51, 30 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Better. But near his paws it seemed like you dodged everything. Darken it just a tad.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 22:42, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Thrushpelt(W)- for approval


Ok I really don't want my Thrushpaw to go to waste so I made this one. Sand wich  989  18:19, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Lizardstripe (Q) - For approval


(M) - It's...Lizard...stripe... Okay, so I don't actually like her that much, for she's probably the reason that Brokenstar became evil. But she did die of Greencough, and her kits would have only been apprentices.

I used classic tabby markings. I know that it never said she had white on her muzzle, but I can't imagine a cat with a white underbelly and chest without a white muzzle. Meh, I can change it if you guys think I should. Comments? ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   18:19, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I a well OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful! I see nothing wrong!Minnowclaw 18:22, 30 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

This is great! You're turning into oene of our most talented artists Moss! You're getting as consistent as Dawn :) I can't see anything either. I love the muzzle, it looks really good. I say leave it with a white muzzle. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I love it! Its even better than your Silverstream! :) Great job, Moss! Hawkfire ♫  Go Aggies! 20:04, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I didn't make Silverstream, the ever so talented Shimmer did :D. Anyways, thank for the complements, everyone! ₪ <span style="font:12px Papyrus;display:inline;border:Goldenrod 2px solid;background-color:white;padding:04px;"> MosswhiskerAndStealthfire   20:08, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Icewhisker(MC) - For Approval
I know how horrible it is. xP My first textured cat. I kinda liked the way he came out... The first version I tried of him was... well, you don't really want to know. xD I was really bored and wanted to work on something so.. tada!--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 22:40, 30 July 2009 (UTC)