Warriors Wiki talk:World

StarClan - Silver Nomination
Well, all the other non-four clans were being nominated, so I thought I would work on this one. The article looks fine to me, but I have one question. Does the History section need references? There was a comment on the talk page saying we did, and I wasn't sure. I don't think so, but if we do, I will be more than happy to add them. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, history sections do not need references, but can you add more references for the description sections? 23:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

For like Fourtrees and Warm-Rocks? The other description sections have a reference for almost every sentence. 03:23, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

I guess you could, but I'm not sure. Maybe expand The Sight a little more, because Spottedleaf had a big moment. 01:47, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you don't have to cite every sentence, but you should cite every sentence that is unconfirmed or non-obvious. 01:03, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 23:58, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

If he isn't, may I take over? 02:00, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, sure. He hasn't left a comment for a few weeks now. 16:29, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I had this expanded a long time ago x3 Comments? 15:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, XD. Ok, so find another reference for the last sentence in the intro. Then find refs for the last paragraph in territory, Fourtrees, Warm-Rocks, Realtion to Living Cats, Ceremonies, Influence, Life in StarClan, and Other Ancestors. Sorry, I know that's a lot, but if I become inactive again, I'd like to know work is still being done without me having to comment. XD 18:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

SkyClan ~ Silver Nomination
I'll try this again. Last time, I added the territories in the gorge and forest and linked them, so that's that. I went through and expanded it some and fixed some links. So.. yeah. Comments, concerns? 20:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add in The Rescue history. 23:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Also find references for Description and In the Gorge. 23:53, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Also, reference the last sentence of the beginning paragraph at the top. 22:34, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I added in references for the Description and gorge, and at the beginning. I cannot find where Sky got his name on the site, and as for the books it would be listed in Code of the Clans (which I have lost.) And for The Rescue, could someone add that in for me? I do not own it. 01:06, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

There still aren't any references in the Description section. Sorry for the misunderstanding. :P You also need references for the paragraph in the Territory section. 20:30, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 20:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll get started on it. My mind was just off-track. Sorry for the delay. 21:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I went and linked as much as I can from description the territory from Battles of the Clans and Firestar's Quest. Icestorm agreed to help me out on the information needed from Code. 21:24, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. I was just making sure someone was still working on this. 23:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm helped me out. Any other comments? 02:04, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The paragraph about the Gorge in the Territory section needs references. Also, can SkyClan's Destiny be expanded? The whole book is about SkyClan, so I think it could be. Last, Code of the Clans has a Coming Soon template you need to fill in. 02:24, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking a break from the wiki, and my computer in general. I'll fix this up then. There's no time limit on how long I'm gone, but hopefully not very long. 02:32, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

LionClan (Modern) - Silver Nomination
My first silver nomination since...a long time ago. ;D I did the layout and everything to match TigerClan (Modern), which I also nominated. :) I expanded the history a lot, by 2 paragraphs, added a main quote, references, and a leader section. Comments? 23:32, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly make some of the bullets for "Other Information" a bit more descriptive? Other then that, I see nothing wrong. Good job! ^.^ 18:20, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the Other Information section into a Description section. 20:31, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well, TigerClan passed, and that didn't even have a description section, since this is only an alliance, and does not count as a Clan. 23:51, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

So, any other comments? 00:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. CBV? 02:03, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 02:21, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Place of No Stars ~ Silver Nomination
I added the Crookedstar's Promise section in the History and the references. Comments?  Owl   X    G    l    itt    er   4LIFE..    The colors of fall  2:27, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Flesh out Starlight and ''Outcast. ''  Swee  tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think! 13:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Add more references to the last apragraph of the Description. I'm pretty sure the territory can be expanded, and references need to be there, too. I think the Dark Forest was mentioned one or two times in the Original Series. I'm not exactly sure, so you should check. 00:09, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I expanded all sections and the Dark Forest wasn't mentioned in the original series.  Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 01:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand SotM? 16:28, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any way you can expand Starlight? 03:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

For SotM the harpercollins isn't working so might take a little longer and I'll get to doing Starlight right now. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  00:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Did Starlight <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 06:11, October 7, 2011 (UTC) Have you done Outcast yet? Just wondering. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 02:01, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I did Outcast but there wasn't much times the Place of No Stars was mentioned. I got to doing Sign of the Moon eventually. Comments? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 04:26, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Beech copse ~ Silver Nomination
So, I expanded it like crazy, added all the needed citations, and added a description. Comments? 00:06, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Expand uses and description if you can, other than that I like it! Nice work! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 02:12, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add anything else to the intro? Not a lot, just another sentence would be fine. Also, I don't know if the links in the See Also section really fit for the article. But other than that, it looks great from when Icestorm first made it not so long ago! Great job! 02:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

ShadowClan ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded everything. Yes, including SotM which really doesn't have any other info about ShadowClan in it. It matches the other silver Clans almost perfectly, so I think it deserves silver, too. 01:53, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Firestar's Quest and Crookedstar's Promise? Other than that it looks good. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 02:08, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I really can't expand Crookedtstar's Promise. They posed lots of threats to ThunderClan, but not a lot to RiverClan. and if you recall, Firestar's Quest was mostly about Firestar and SkyClan, with hardly any mention of ShadowClan in it. 02:11, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

That's good than! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 13:31, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Any other comments? 18:43, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rat ~ Silver Nomination
(I'm looked at the guidelines first :) And I'm pretty sure it follows the, if not I'm a fail xD) Comments?   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 00:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, you read the guidelines! XD Ok, so you need references for the introduction, Description,a dn Relation to Cats. Also, look at Wolf, Sheep, and Beaver to see what the Description section really means. It needs to be kind of like a research article with real information, not just from the books. Try to model this article after the ones I showed you. Even though this needs work, it won't be declined because it technically does follow the Guidelines, just needs to be tweaked to fit the other Silver articles. 05:27, October 9, 2011 (UTC)