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Wind (Lo) - Redone
BWAHAHAHAHA first image for a while. Color didn't match her leader image, shading/highlights needed to be redone. Blah blah blah. OA was Sandstar12. 20:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Snow, you need to darken your sig so people can read it... Anyway, the eyes on the leader have a ring of orange in them. 22:34, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 23:31 Fri Dec 2

Blur the shading. 16:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. -- 15:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 16:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangluar. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:16, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:14, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine... -- 02:28, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's much darker on her leader image though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:28, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I'll do that now. x3 -- 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is such a strange color to work with. -- 13:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing (W) - Tweaked
Woo, original artist was Sandy and the shading needed to be tweaked. 04:56, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Pretty! 05:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Spur of the moment decision. Blurred and thanks! 06:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit. Theese eese bootifulll.... 08:29 Sun Dec 4

Blur the shading and define the earpink. 22:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the neck shading a bit. 23:50 Thu Dec 8

Oatwhisker (WC) (E) ~ Redone
I just realized I named the file wrong so it didn't reupload. I'll try to fix that. Anyways, OA = Bramble, and it was on the redo list because he needed to be more brownish cream, and the project has a disdain for triangle tabbies. Comments? 16:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes stand out a little more? 16:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a tad bit lighter and blur the rump shading more. This is really neat! 19:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlight on the rump bigger, blur the shading a bit more and lighten it. 21:55, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, please stop repeating what other people said. 22:28 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded. These stripes are so failish... 06:00, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Grrr. Trollsky smash wife. xD Perhaps make the earpink slightly bigger and blur? Sky.....  Just...dust and echoes 18:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I liek deh stripes. Could you make the colour a bit... warmer? *doesn't know how to explain* it's kinda dull right now. 02:30 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded. Done. I looked at it without shading and the color itself was pretty warm, so I added highlights and lightened the shading. 04:30, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (Ki) - Tweaked
Original Artist was Maplefern; patches needed to be dappled. Comments? Elorisa  17:14, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the patches less smudged and make the dapples more like the ones on her other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:10, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! So cute! Make <- this ear pink more triangular. Actually, make 'em both. And one is lighter/darker than the other ear-pink. 22:56 Sun Dec 4

Blur the patches. 23:10, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around her left and back paws. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:20, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this Elo? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and it needed to be longhaired. 17:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

define the shading on the white and smudge the stripes along the edges of the patch their in - 20:01, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 20:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Both ears need to be brown, not onl one, if you notice on his warrior 20:28, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, please 21:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, don't repeat things that have already been said. Smudge the paw on <--- that side a little bit. Darken the shading just a touch. 22:02, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:04, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate the brown and darken the markings. 20:08 Tue Dec 6

Darken the stripes - 23:02, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. Sky.....  Just...dust and echoes 00:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white a bit. 20:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this...? 01:17 Sat Dec 10

I'm going to have to withdraw this. I'm too ill to work on anything at the moment. 15:16, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Fawnstep - Tweaked
Whew, one spot left! Shading needed darkening, OA= Hiddensun, and Rainwhisper added white paws after that. - 20:24, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list for this, but the eyes are very neon. Can you lighten or darken them to a more natural color? 20:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

And make the herbs a more natural colour also. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

A more natural color on the eyes and herbs, and the paws look a bit gray. 21:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow: Please refrain from repeating comments that have already been said. 22:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

And the paws are fine, it's just shading. 22:20 Sun Dec 4

Could you fix the shading on the paws? it's bothering me. It looks like there's parts of it that are lighter then it should be for shading. I'm not sure how you'd go about doing that though... Maybe add another layer and try and balance it out... 19:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think the paws look fine, honestly :3 but could you fix the one really bright white pixel near where the chest meets the legs? 02:36 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded - heh, Im so confused - 23:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste near her right paw :D 23:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 23:10, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Snaketail (E) - Tweaked
Can someone help me get rid of the waste? :3. It's tweaked, honest xD. Orginal artist was Ashshadow' Neede shading blurred and gray flecks on chin. Elorisa  01:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll hlp you get rid of the waste. One moment please. 01:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some white parts on the tail, and can you blur the shading a bit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There ya go Elo =3 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there, *Was requested to get rid of re-appearing waste* One seccond, then,. ^^ . 02:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks really blurred to me; fix that? 02:37 Tue Dec 6

But the lineart isn't blurred; I checked xD. Before I reuploaded. -- Elorisa   13:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It sure looks blurred though.... And there's still empty white specks on the tail and back ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:12, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is fine, I think. Blur the highlights. 18:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is blurred. I don't care that you say it isn't...it looks odd like that. Can you fix it, please? 23:09, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't even know how I'd fix it...>.> -- Elorisa   03:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it not so dark all around the lineart. And if you truly can't do that then maybe you should withdraw this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:57, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

So I'm supposed to withdraw something because I can't do something with it...>.>. I'll just redo it. ;-; -- Elorisa   21:37, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. If you're incapable of doing what is needed, you shouldn't be working on the charart. And do you mean re-tweak it, or redo it completely? Because you still do need permission to redo completely. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Do not take on chararts that are beyond your ability. You slow down the project in doing so. Sorry if it sounds mean, but it's true. Practice chararts on your own time and then take on harder chararts in the project, but for now stick to what you can do. 16:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I retweaked it :3 -- Elorisa   21:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's a bit better. Make the gray specks smaller and blur them a bit more, and there's some white on the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I did her warrior, might as well do her kit as well. Fixed shading and highlights. OA was Pantherstorm. I did my best to get all of the waste off, if you see anymore I'll get it. Comments? 20:31, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and erase all the waste (by the tail and paws) 20:35 Tue Dec 6

Make the earpink a bit bigger on both ears. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:27, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't I not allowed to change things that weren't down for tweaking? 21:55, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Why wouldn't you change them? Might as well do it now; if it's not done now, it'll just have to be tweaked again later. 22:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry, I thought there was a rule or something, unless it was changed. Fixed earpink, shading, and waste. 20:34, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

You have to re-upload this over her kit image so it will work properly on the charart template. ;3 21:53, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. 20:12, December 8, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Brighten the eyes. 23:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste under the back paw. <span style="">23:48 Thu Dec 8

Can you darken the shading? 61.68.145.227

^^^ That was me. <span style="">07:18, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Re-Uploaded - Excuse the shading job. I've just started using layers and all, so I'm still getting the hang of it. Changes not showing. xP 14:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Sorreltail (Q) - Redone
Okay, okay, before anyone gets upset, I get permission to redo it. She needed to match her warrior, and the image was just overall blotchy and...strange. OA was Icestorm123 or Insane. Comments for improvement? 04:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the black patch a lot smaller? It doesn't seem that large on the warrior image. The dapples need to be blurred as well to match. 20:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The only way I can make the black patch smaller is to bring it up a little and make the ginger patch on her shoulder a tad bit bigger, the fact that her belly is stretched and in her warrior, that part of her body is hidden/slightly contorted so I can't do too much with that. 23:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thar ya go. I can't make the back patch any smaller than this unless it's not gonna match the warrior image 16:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's all good. I understand the queen image is significantly longer than the other images. Could you blur the dapples just a smidge, or at least lower the opacity on them? 16:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the edge of the patches - 23:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:29, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rockshade (W) - Redone
OA was Tawny, taken over by my dear friend Frostheart. Anyway, shading and stuff needed to be redone. I also refuse to give him a stumpy tail because he was a kit at the time. All kits have stumpy tails. 23:10, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots and tear the ear. 00:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Forgot about the ear ._. 00:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink stand out more from the ear, I can hardly see it. Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  15:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit more. <span style="">01:34 Sat Dec 10

Smallstar (L) ~ Tweaked
Tried to make it a little less plain...shouldn't take much to add this to the kit image as well. OA is Nightfall. 02:43, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">03:08 Fri Dec 9

Re-uploaded. 03:11, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

A bit more, please ^^ and darken the colour slightly. <span style="">01:13 Sat Dec 10

Of the earpink, that is. <span style="">01:14 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded. 01:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (W) - Redone
His last image. Finally! I was getting sick of him. XD The only thing that's different on here is the tail and far leg, so if I change anything else, it won't match the deputy image anymore. Just warning you. OA was Goldencloud. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Just made him long furred. :3 Comments?

There's some waste above the head and ears. Cute! <span style="">23:05, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Eaglekit (K)~ Tweak
Shading need to be redone. Looks like a redo but its not. OA was GroceryBag. I did some other small things to this to but i cant remember what they were... Comments? 01:23, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the dot of waste above his head. 03:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 09:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) - Redone
Gotta love those ginger and white cats! Anyway, shade of ginger didn't match and it was done in a shorthair blank. So... yeah.. OA was Darkhallows, tweaked by Splashpelt and I think Oblivion. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)