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Flower Foot (Hunter) - For Approval
Yikes I'm not sure this looks very good..  HA WK FI RE98  22:27, September 10, 2018 (UTC)

The stripes go all the way across on the main body, and don't taper off how you have it. You also need to reupload over File:Flower Foot.hunter.png. (this version had the right idea for the stripes, speaking of.)

I cant see the marking on the face. Like the 2 upside down "V"s, can you fix that? And ''how dose this look so good! Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 04:39, September 11, 2018 (UTC)''

Reuploaded. Messed around with the stripes a bit. Thank you, Owlbite! I tried darkening that forehead "V" but I'm not sure how much I can really define it on these blanks! There's a very limited amount of forehead space.  HA WK FI RE98  14:05, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smudge the stripes to match the others? They seem to be more smudged, the other images might have texture as well but I can't tell. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 19:20, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

There isn't texture on this set, surprisingly. ​​​​​

I mostly used the smudge tool to create these stripes, Mink! Could you elaborate to give me a clearer idea of how to make them look better? :-)  HA WK FI RE98  20:00, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

The other images are smudged to go along with what would be texture if she had it (she doesn't) the stripes just make it look that way. If you see how the warrior is smudged, it needs to look a little more like that. These stripes seem to blurry at the moment. If that makes sense. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:11, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sharpened up the stripes a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  20:36, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Connect the facial stripes to the eyes, I think the dorsal stripe is leaking right along the middle of the back, and the shading is leaking along the tip of the tail. 18:49, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed facial stripes and erased leakage.  HA WK FI RE98  01:27, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 20:10, September 15, 2018 (UTC)

My apologies for breaking the CBA, but the stripes should be a bit sharper. I didn't blur mine at all, and these look blurred. ​​​

Reuploaded. I hope this looks better. I guess I tried to make them look like my own style a little too much!  HA WK FI RE98  15:17, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:51, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry for breaking this again, but there are a lot of miscolored pixels on the shoulder, tail, and front legs. I'm not sure how they got there, but they should definitely be fixed. ​​

Those pixels are results from me sharpening the stripes. I think, however, it looks fine and adds texture to the image. If I get rid of them the stripes will look "blurred" again. Can I have a second opinion?  HA WK FI RE98  13:58, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Skye - those pixels look almost white, and the other images definitely don't have that. Especially for the ones on the < sides of the tail and front legs, the others I'm not noticing so much. Also, there's waste along the > side of the tail^^ 14:41, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Thorn (Hunter) - For Evaluation
Hope I did this right! 17:57, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

The blank is too small. Make sure you're downloading it properly. Try downloading it from here. If that's not the problem, then make sure you aren't changing the resolution when making the charart in your art program. Thorn's image also requires texture. Hope this helps. ^^ 18:58, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? There's tutorials here on shading if you're confused. 21:22, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

it should also be the short-furred blank as well. 21:28, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

^ so use this blank instead my bad 21:48, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Also, could you add/define the earpink? 00:21, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely redone with texture and defined shading & ear-pink -- 16:57, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

This is great! Smooth out the shading overall and definitely add some on the body and tail. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:05, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Lovely! Add some shading to the tail and add some definition to the eye color.  HA WK FI RE98  17:06, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Add the notches ears and define/make more visible the texture. 18:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and the earpink. 20:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Can you darken the texture by a few shades? I can barely see it. It seems much light than the others in the set. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 19:55, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded added another layer of darker texture, defined eye shading, added tail shading and ear notches. Thanks for all the support! Unfortunately, the program I use doesn't really have very good options for smoothing shading and it's very difficult to do so without colour distortion so please could I have a second opinion on the smoothness of the shading? Thanks! Also, what do you mean by define the ear-pink - should I remove the blur? -- 13:19, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

By define the ear pink, I mean make it more visible on the cat so it doesn't blend in with the fur. May I ask what program you're using? And, do you have the shading on a different layer from the base color? Either way, could you define the tail shading some more and add some shading depth, too? 14:06, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded defined ear-pink and tail shading and darkened shading in some areas. I use Krita (without any custom brushes) and yes, I have the shading on a different layer. -- 17:25, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Ah, I've never used Krita. I'm assuming it has an anti-aliasing box, so could you try turning it off when using the blur tool/the equivalent on the shading? 21:25, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and face. 21:26, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Darken/define the tail shading, should have some running all along the top of it in this light source 21:52, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Alder(Hunter) ~For Approval
I hate the earpink, but I wanted to get this up Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:40, September 15, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall. I know you said you disliked the earpink, but it's only supposed to be on one ear, the one closest to us. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:28, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

No, you can use both ears for this blank. The ear pink is a good enough color and doesn't look too far off from what I have. ​​​​

This is really great, I love the pattern. Define the shading a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  02:28, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, sorry Hawky, I didn't see you! you commented while I was making it :POwlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 02:37, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Sharpen up the pattern; the kit is first and the pattern is much sharper and the fleck-like specks of brown are smaller. ​​

I agree with Hawk, you can't even really tell what's shading. But can you expand the ear pink, the tip of the ear doesn't have any Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 03:11, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

These blanks don't require the entire ear filled in; most of them don't and it's optional. ​​

Re-up, not even 24 hours, and I've already done a re-do, gg life, gg Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 06:03, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Owlbite, defining the shading does not mean darkening all of the shading in its entirety. It means maybe picking locations that are the furthest from your light source and making the shading on those areas more apparent. I usually just use the burn tool and darken the edges of those areas and that works pretty effectively. ^^  HA WK FI RE98  12:30, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Lol, I re-did it, and it made the shading weird! Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 16:57, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, It does have earpink, I defined the shading, and I sharpened the pattern. Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 19:55, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Did you sharpen the pattern up? This is still too over-blurred. ​​​​

Could you define the pupil? It seems to blend in with the iris. Also, the light source isn't very clear, at least in my opinion, so could you maybe make sure it's consistent in its placement? 15:21, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The pupil is fine and eye style is artist's choice. ​​

Could you define the shading depth on the main body more? 21:25, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The eyes should be a light green color to match the other images. 22:35, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The eyes is a eye style I am useing, and her eye coler is not mentioned, can I get a second opinion?  Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 05:39, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

You have to match her other images with the eye coloring... which in this case, is a lighter green coloring.

Half Moon (Alt Healer) - CBA
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Can you define the shading some? This is gorgeous. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 03:08, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Can I ask for a second opinion? I had more defined shading on this when I first made it, and it didn't really look too great. ​​

I think the shading is defined enough.  HA WK FI RE98  03:19, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

I think it could be defined a bit more on the hind leg furthest from us. 03:24, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 21:25, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Rock (Healer) - CBA
give this man anti wrinkle cream ASAP 03:28, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

You made him somewhat lovely, how, maybe defie the ear shading on the far ear? Malina457 (talk) 03:36, September 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Can you define the chest shading? I can bearaly see it. Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 05:27, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the hind leg farthest from us.  HA WK FI RE98  12:26, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the facial shading? Also, there's some waste above the shoulder lineart. ​

Can you expand the shading on the limbs and define them? Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 04:55, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded just redid it. 20:48, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

The front shoulder feels really flat compared to the rest of the image, since there's not texture or shading. Is there any way you can add depth? 00:00, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me? I think the area you're seeing that looks flat is intentionally without shading? Plus, depth is not required to be the same throughout the entire image.

reuploaded took the time 2 fix some other shading that was bothering me as well 04:53, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Half Moon (Healer) ~ For Approval
this is not my best work but white cats are hard :/ Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:51, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and define the facial shading. ​​​​​

Lighten the chest so it stays consistent with your light source (it looks like it's coming from in front of her head?)  HA WK FI RE98  21:21, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

The tint looks a bit neon, but it might just be my laptop. Warriorct (talk) 20:54, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is tinted and various other images across the wiki have used almost the exact same coloring. I believe blue is being used here, and it helps prevent the image from looking extremely gray. ​​​

Re-Ups, yes it is blue. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 21:38, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the areas where you removed shading (you can easily see where you erased - like sharp lines in the shading). And there's leaking shading on the hind leg furthest from us. And define the light on all the limbs/paws with the exception of the front leg furthest from us. 22:33, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

There's a lot of erasure marks on the haunches and tail - just figure I give you a reference of where it is. 00:18, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Those aren't erasure marks, they're suppose to be there. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 00:57, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

The marks on the hind leg and end of the spine don't look like they're supposed to be there. They are squiggly (for lack of a better word) and don't match any other color/highlight on the image.  HA WK FI RE98  01:00, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

That's how I smudged my shading, not erasure marks. The only erase marks is on the tail and thats just the hard edge of the shading. I used this type of shading on Shattered Ice as well. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 01:11, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth them out then, they look very sharp and harsh Malina457 (talk) 03:17, September 19, 2018 (UTC)malina

It kind of looks like there's a brush tool used here to add white? Regardless, I'm going to add on to the majority here and say that it needs to be smoothed out a lot, since it stands out way too much and they do look like erasure marks.

Crowfrost (Le) ~ For Approval
If Ravenpaw gets a rogue image for mistakenly being called a rogue, then Crowfrost get a leader image for mistakenly being called a leader. Comments? 23:44, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

I really don't think this is the same thing... loners and rogues are similar, so that's explainable. But he was never actually a leader at any point.  HA WK FI RE98  23:47, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

I think this counts, as we've done things like this for almost every other rank, other than that, define the shading Malina457 (talk) 23:59, September 17, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded. Tawnypelt also got a deputy image when she was mistakenly called the ShadowClan deputy when Tigerheart was deputy at the time. 00:08, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Hawk, I don't think Crowfrost would get a leader image. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 03:46, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

We made a deputy image for Tawnypelt when she was describe as the ShadowClan deputy in Thunder and Shadow. She was not deputy at that time, and we did not know that she was ever deputy until River of Fire, yet we still made an image for the mistake. How is this any different? 04:03, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

She shouldn't have gotten one either. It adds confusion, especially for people from outside the wiki visiting the character pages. They will be confused why they have an image for that rank even though they aren't listed or categorized as that rank. It promotes false information.  HA WK FI RE98  11:13, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

this isn't the place to argue this. start a section on the discussion page, because as it is this qualifies. 11:34, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the tail? And yes, this counts. We document all mistakes, regardless of being rank or description, and that's final. Discussions are fine to bring up, but definitely not on the image itself when it does nothing but take up space and takes away from what this section is for. ​​​​

Reuploaded. 18:52, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Straying away from that discussion, could you center the white on his face? The other images show it on the middle of his face. 21:28, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:45, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

can you make the white on the belly wider? It seems to me like its to thin. and the white on his face, (I know this, I did his kit image,) top one needs to be thinner and the bottom one needs to be longer, and shuldent this be labled as alt leader? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 05:34, September 19, 2018 (UTC)