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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. -- 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

These are lovely and I can't see anything to comment on, so CBA? 23:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but i feel like the blank looks slightly too crowded in general. notably the face (might help if you remove some of the lines on the ears ig?), and how does the blank look with those three lines removed on the cat's back leg? also, i feel like the tail still looks too straight–feel like a cats tail would naturally be more bent in such a position. 04:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

also, i feel like the linearart thickness is pretty uneven on the shorthaired blank– it's extremely thick on the cat's back and on the leg in which the paw pads are exposed but thin in other places. 04:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded The tail is based of something like this https://www.omlet.co.uk/images/cache/1024/604/Cat-Chartreux-a_plush_coated_chartreux_cat_lying_down.jpg]] with the tail being straight and just the tip being curled. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:39, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

That, to me, still shows it curving a bit more than what you've currently got here. I'd also maybe suggest shortening the leg with the visible toe beans? Not sure if you'd see that much leg from this angle, especially when you look at the blank without a tail.

I honestly think the tail looks fine. A cats tail is always flat to the ground 23:44, 8/05/2019

CBA? 04:48, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry but my comment about the leg showing the beans being too long, still stands as a part of my comment above.

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:18, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

One last thing, I promise, but the fur on our left backleg looks very clumpy, and I think it could be smoothed out more to match the other blanks style for that area (if that makes sense?) and with that, the same would be applied to the other leg too

Reuploaded Wasn't quite sure of what was being asked, and I didn't know which blank was being referred to either, but if I'm not mistaken it is the left blank. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:55, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation
it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. top left corner. 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good!

'''reuploaded. '''

Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from this version, as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... ​​

Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base​ because she was the OA. 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. ​​

'''reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? 17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws.  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, too, overall. 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail. 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? 01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

After a month of it being on the approval page, the image will be declined, yes. Can you define the light on the tail, and just a tad bit on the front leg closest to us? 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the shading could still be lightened overall 02:45, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

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'''reuploaded. 23:08, July 27, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image still appears to be overblurred, try checking your layers for waste and removing it to reduce the blurryness. -- 23:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC) '''reuploaded. meadowslip, have mercy on me.'''

Lighten/smooth the shading. -- 01:36, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 03:00, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out more. Here's a little tip: If you're constantly being told to smooth out the shading, smooth it out a lot more than you usually do. I learned this and it really helps, trust me. -- 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. 19:47, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:59, July 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image has that overblurred look to it again. Try checking for waste to remove or see if the background is acting up. -- 20:02, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:56, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and add more shading depth in general to the image. -- 22:06, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:22, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some of the shading on the tail to define the lightsource, and add some more facial shading? 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 16:19, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing much light on the tail. -- 16:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 19:26, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the other half of the tail. -- 19:28, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reupreuploaded.

You're not defining the light on the correct tail section. Define it on >>> this side, away from the bend. -- 20:25, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you redline it, please? 20:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

When I can get the computer, I'll gladly make one for you. -- 21:46, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. 21:45, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

you go! Red is where there needs to be light, green is waste, and orange is where the shading needs to be defined. -- 21:53, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks, potato. 05:18, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Might you smooth out the tail shading and the shading on the visible back foot?

'''reuploaded. 18:59, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading on the back foot and tail, make sure you smooth it out when erasing. -- 16:51, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading on the -> ear? the earpink is a little hard to see <span style="">06:15 Mon Aug 5

'''reuploaded. 15:54, August 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add some more shading on the back end of the tail and in that odd patch in the middle of the front end. 03:48, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

There is a large amount of waste on the tail, and can you recede the shading some on that little shoulder line near the back and chest? I think it could be also smoothed out on the tail (which I showed you in the redline) and the back foot (not the back paw). Could you also add a thinner darker layer of shading to the image to help define the shading depth? -- 00:12, August 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

Lighten/smooth out the shading. Perhaps make the depth layer a tid thinner, and smooth it out as well. -- 00:52, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

Lighten the shading a lot more. -- 01:16, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

Define the light source. -- 04:07, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

Also define the edges of the shading some; it's all starting really get over blurred which is where, i think, you're losing your shading source 05:31, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

Much better!! Add a bit of shading under the chin and jaw. Add a bit of light to the top of the first part of the tail, at the bottom of the hind foot, and maybe a bit of light to the middle of the back 02:46, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

I've created a redline for you. Red is where you can add shading, blue is where shading can be removed, and green is waste along the back. Hope this helps ^^ 14:59, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks, vec. ''' 18:44, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Remove a sliver of shading on the <--- front leg. 02:30, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. sorry for being inactive, i'm in CA and most of the time stuck in a car. ''' 01:15, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

oi leads, this has been here for a month. .-. 21:22, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
18:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred and need to be thinner. Define the eye depth and light on the foreleg. -- 18:57, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She needs short fur. 18:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

oh shoot, sorry patch. 19:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

This needs to match to the apprentice's side in terms of the stripes. -- 20:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

There is also some waste in front of the head, by the back legs and around the butt. (Am I allowed to say that?) <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong  <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 16:18, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

you can call the bottom area the haunch. sorry for being inactive. 17:48, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:55, August 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Sharpen the stripes more, and the stripes are thinner and darker. -- 16:11, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and remove some on the tail and foreleg. 03:50, August 7, 2019 (UTC

'''reuploaded. '''

The stripes are too dark, and there should be more in general. -- 17:06, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Her stripes appear more horizontal on her other images. Reference the apprentice for them since it's on the same side. 19:11, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Try to curve the stripes so that they look like they are on a 3D surface.

'''reuploaded. '''

Give the stripes some variation, just so they don't look the same. Also, match the stripes to her apprentice. -- 16:42, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:15, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

Stripes are too dark, and they should be smudged more to match the other images in her set. -- 03:03, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. '''

Define the light source. -- 15:12, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:44, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

There is some waste floating around her face, ear, and legs. Add some shading around her neck, kinda in the shape of a collar as seen here. -- 20:46, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:50, August 11, 2019 (UTC)'''

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and smudge the stripes a little. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 21:19, August 11, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:14, August 11, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smudge the stripes more. <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  10:26, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

''i can't, or else the the stripes will be all.. blurry. 18:06, August 12, 2019 (UTC)''

Try a 1px smudge tool with a low rate to see if that works. The light should be defined some on the tail and foreleg. -- 18:17, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 21:25, August 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

reuploaded. 23:15, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Redline for the pattern. The apprentice's shoulder stripes are not cooperating with this blank -.- Also add some shading in the stomach area and smooth out the tail shading. The stripes also appear darker on the other images. 15:14, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thank you. ''' 18:45, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light some on the tail? Since it's a small space, I would erase with a 1px eraser and dust off a few pixels touching the haunch, then smooth it out. -- 13:46, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred a bit, then it looks like they were smudged vertically with a small brush, probably 1px. 15:01, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:19, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (W) - Declined
06:03, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a little bit and add some to the bottom of the chest, to make that area look less flat

can you define the light on the front legs and the tail? <span style="">11:22, 8/10/2019

Add more shading to the very end of the tail and the back leg closest to us. -- 16:16, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 16:47, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

By adding more shading to the very end of the tail, I mean a line of shading stretching from the current tail shading to the tail-tip. -- 16:58, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:29, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you define the light on the tail some, and add more shading stretching from the back to the back leg? -- 17:41, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:46, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

Yes! This is looking very good, Ripple. Can you add a slight bit of light to the back leg closest to us? Probably near the toe area. Can you also define the light on the front leg farthest from us slightly? -- 20:48, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thank you. 19:55, August 11, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you define the light on the front leg a little more? <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  01:09, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:41, August 13, 2019 (UTC)'''

More redlines! Green is waste, red you should add shading (mostly on the front legs some more, and blue is where you should remove shading. 15:16, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks. ''' 18:54, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the head and add some (not a lot) to the ---> front limb. You're so close! 12:13, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:01, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg, on the mid-section of the front leg closest to us, and just slightly on the other front leg as well, plus add a small amount of shading on the paw on said leg. Light should also be defined on the tail, on the mid-section that touches the bottom part of the haunch/back leg. Soften the eye gradient some as well. Add more shading depth (thin layer of shading) to the front leg farthest from us, the back paw farthest from us, and the ears and chin. alright I'm done now lol -- 13:50, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 14:27, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

yes. 19:45, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

As per the guidelines, though, I do have to decline this. The rules have a 'one week without uploads' rule. However, you can always repost this image once it is properly archived. ​

alright. 21:23, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Owlstar (SotC) (ki) - Declined
13:07, August 11, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth the circle of shading on his cheek?

Reuploaded 18:46, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe smooth out the shading in general? 16:10, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 15:02, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of uploading.

Riverstar (K) - For Approval
Sorry I've been gone for so long. Tinystream (talk) 20:52, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the dorsal tail stripe a bit. 15:28, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Reup Yep, sorry. Tinystream (talk) 06:01, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

why does one stripe on the tail look blue? can you change this? <span style="">20:52, 8/23/2019

Because it's in blue shading. Should there not be shading there? Tinystream (talk) 23:32, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

I believe some shading can be removed down there, just so the stripe isn't completely blue. -- 23:34, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Rosetail (K) - For Approval
I didn't really know how to do the stripes. Tinystream (talk) 20:52, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes should be a little thicker; and smudged to with a small brush to give the illusion of texture. the old warrior is a really good point of reference; for the stripes and the style used by beebs

Still working? 13:52, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reup How's this? I redid the stripes to be more like the old warrior's instead of the apprentice's. Tinystream (talk) 06:01, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

there's one tail stripe that's darker than the rest. did you use the same shading on this as riverstar's kit? <span style="">20:53, 8/23/2019

Yes, though Riverstar's is top left and this is directly left. Tinystream (talk) 23:32, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Same as Riverstar. -- 23:34, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) - For Approval
Tinystream (talk) 20:52, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

could you add a little bit of shading to the bottom of the tail?

Is it me, or am I seeing gray pixels on the top of the tail? -- 13:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

I think the base should be redder, and more stripes on the shoulder. 15:25, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 13:52, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reup I'm not sure how I could fix the gray pixels, because I can't see them? Tinystream (talk) 06:01, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

yeah i do see the gray pixels on the tail top fur <span style="">20:54, 8/23/2019

Well, I really don't know how to fix it. Tinystream (talk) 23:32, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Looking back at it, I believe they are fine now. There was a similar case with miscolored pixels being seen, but it was decided not to be touched. -- 23:36, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Rileypool (Alt Ki) - CBA
He is not the same color as Graystripe, what in the world were these editors thinking? Which, I might need to darken the base a bit...hm. ​​​

Yeah if the base is supposed to match graystripe, then it could be darkened just a tiny bit. 14:31, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you darken the facial shading?

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 14:26, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Rabbitkit (WC) (K) ~ CBA
<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 20:18, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading should be defined on the tail just a little bit. -- 22:20, August 19, 2019 (UTC)]

Can you smoothen the shading along the thigh? It looks rather blotchy at the moment 22:55, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 08:51, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

I think the white belly could be expanded to be visible just above the tail. 21:42, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded-<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 10:04, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:01, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (K) - For Approval
Welp let's do this!Moo (talk) 20:07, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

this should b longhaired. 20:09, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

U sure? Oki!Moo (talk) 20:16, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, the rest of her images are long-haired, as seen on the charart section of her page. The kit needs to match them. ​

There should be dapples on the black and ginger, not stripes. -- 21:26, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

I've added you to the reservation table. Please add your images and the date you reserved them in the future. ^^ 22:18, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded-This better?Moo (talk) 22:30, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

The dapples are bigger and fainter, and more blurred. Smooth out the shading, since it's a little sharp, and also define the light on the foreleg. -- 22:41, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did what you guys said and fixed the leg which was still png O.O Moo (talk) 23:10, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

The dapples look too big, they should be medium size (reference the apprentice since it shares the same side). I think the dapples should be defined a bit on the black as well. -- 23:13, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dapples better? Moo (talk) 23:48, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Yes! But they should be more faint, because she's described as having "very faint dapples". -- 00:04, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded How 'bout now? Moo (talk) 00:17, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't be nearly as much white on the tail. The tail needs to match the general style the other images follow, specifically the apprentice, in this case, since they match sides - which has the ginger and then the black at the end half for the most part

Reuploaded Spots should be better nowMoo (talk) 20:28, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the dapples on the black. The dapples should also flow more and point in the direction of the fur, and should have more variety in how they are shaped (see warrior for ex). -- 01:50, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedMoo (talk) 03:48, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the dapples should be smaller and more clustered together. I also think there should be a little bit of orange peeking out on the forearm, and a little bit of white on the haunch (see app). 14:24, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W) ~ CBA
do i look like i know what a solid is 21:57, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:02, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Runningbrook (W) ~ CBA
Not quite sure about this. 01:45, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Looks good

Rainfur (SkC) (W) ~ CBA
Back with this I guess. 01:45, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Patchpelt (W) ~ CBA
<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 18:17, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:25, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Quietkit (K) ~ For Approval
<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:23, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

i think with these family tree only kiddos - the colours should match their icons (on the pages)

Looking at the old kit, it appears it's a pointed tabby- which means the stripes on the body should be removed. (unless the old image doesn't count) -- 21:33, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Old designs should be kept unless someone asks to redo it. The old image should still be matched, all while tweaking the colors as Max suggested. ​​

reuploaded --<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 21:00, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading/shading depth some? 01:26, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes on the old kit appear to go up just slightly onto the haunch. -- 01:28, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reed Tail (K) ~ For Approval
20:00, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Onestar (K) - For Approval
I think he's pretty neat 21:55, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define/add more mottles? 02:07, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

reup 22:18, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Heronwing (RC) (W) - CBA


CBA? 01:26, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Heronwing (RC) (Alt. W) - For Approval


I think this is like Larkwing and Crouchfoot where only the app would get the alt since he was referred to as Heronpaw. 02:04, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

This would have been valid during Bramblestar's Storm, since we didn't know which description was correct and which was the error, but since we have multiple books in A Vision of Shadows that list him as dark gray-and-black, it's proven that the brown tabby mention was a mistake and can now only be applied to his apprentice image.

Rainwhisker (K) - For Approval
-- 01:32, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the stomach area and maybe on <-- side of the haunch? 02:05, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:36, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (Ghost) - For Approval
original ghosty boi. Maybe... I'll go fiddle with the stripes on the softpaw... kinda liking this more than what I had going there. ​

Rowanberry (Kit) ~ For Approval
i love her 20:21, August 23, 2019 (UTC)