Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 23

Stonefur (W)- Approved


My first Charart up for approval! Comments? Suggestions? Concerns? (P.S. if you were making a charart for Stoenfur please tell me.)--Mosspath  of Skyclan 15:57, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Whoever this is, please sign with --~ next time so we know who you are. For the image, blur the shading more.-- *Minn owc law*  15:55, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Whoops! Sorry! I'll fix that.--Mosspath  of Skyclan 15:57, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

It's fine, no need to be sorry.-- *Minn owc law*  16:00, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred shading.--Mosspath  of Skyclan 16:04, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good for your first charart. I'd suggest you make the earpink darker though. See Rockpaw as an example or Rubblepaw or Scorchfur. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:07, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened ear pink.--Mosspath  of Skyclan 16:14, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is great for your first charart! All I see is that the hind leg shading needs to be blended a little more. --Hallow's Eve 09 16:15, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink isn't that much darker. Try making it darker and redder.-- *Minn owc law*  16:17, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened ear pink and blurred shading more.--Mosspath  of Skyclan 16:26, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Good job, I don't see anything wrong.-- *Minn owc law*  16:31, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Stonefur's eyes should be more brownish, and he needs battle scars on his ears. Otherwise, this is great! --<span style="color:Red; background:Green; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 16:35, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the eyes more brown and gave him battle scarred ears. I'm not sure if that's what people would call "battle scarred ears" I just made the tips rougher.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Crimson;">Mosspath <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Cyan;background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> of <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Yellow;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Skyclan 16:45, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Great job, Mosspath! All I can see is that when you tipped the top of the ear off, you didn't completely erase all of the lineart that you got rid of. Otherwise, the ears are fine, because the scars would actually be on the back of the ears, which we can't see from this angle of the image. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 17:23, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine now, and do what Ice said. Also, there's some gray above the ears. NVM. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 17:24, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Erased stuff above ears.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Crimson;">Mosspath <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Cyan;background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> of <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Yellow;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Skyclan 17:34, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  19:33, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Approved! Great first image =) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:44, November 2, 2009 (UTC)