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Voleclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
This was supposed to be here because Cloud is withdrawn. Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  00:18, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we weren't allowed to do that? Post a charart before the images are archived. I may be wrong, but I just thought one of the leads said that atsome point...... *shrugs* Anyways, fi it stays up, redden the earpink a bit and make it bigger. Looks great! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw! I edit conflicted with you 3 times over this. This will be declined and im tired of typing out why. 00:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Icy! XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But I was editing the same time as you, and Lakestream(?) is supposed to be approved. Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  00:32, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is over the limit until something is acutally archived. 00:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's exactly 35 images. I just archived Lakeshine. 00:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. But for future reference, please don't post until the conflicting image is archived. Voleclaw needs a gray nose. 00:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything. 00:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, sorry but there was only 34 when I uploaded but I guess Iceheart beat me to it. :) Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  01:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. 22:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure if changes are showing and @Pearls what do you mean 'Blur everything.' Why does the nose have to be gray? Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  22:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

@Wild Sorry, that was when i wasant thinking. I apologize. 22:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading under the chin and blur the highlight on the chest; it looks a bit blotchy, darken the shading on the right side. 03:04, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail and blur all the highlights. ` 23:23, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

i thought voleclaw was black oh well. Nice job but the shading is blotchy blur it some. 23:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The right earpink looks smaller than the other. Also blur the forehead shading. 00:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just letting you know, you need to work on this or it will be declined. 00:59, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivystripe, yes I know. @CinderxLion, Nope he's dark gray ;) Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  21:56, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  22:08, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

there's something in the highlight on his chest plz fix that. And i know he's dark gray now. 19:33, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ` 00:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  21:16, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 00:36, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

The midriff highlights looks messy. <font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  00:11, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going on Vacation for a couple weeks so if anyone wants to take this over they can. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:13, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wildfire, why not just withdraw it? 17:55, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Saying that anyone can take over this means the same thing as withdrawing, doesn't it? 23:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it is. That's what Wildfire was saying XD. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:46, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over....Please? 01:05, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Imma reupload in a few seconds. It's gonna be good! 01:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may take over, no need to ask, just announce it 01:20, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay the place where the light is coming is from the left. Comments? 01:12, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is way too bright. Dull it down, blur it, and also move it up in allignment with the center of the ear. 20:06, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I thought it was a little bit odd. But anyways comments? 22:28, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink darker, but not too dark. 11:31, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Just darken it the slightest little bit 23:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks like it's hanging out of the ear, in other words its too long. 14:02, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's what I thought. But changes aren't showing 23:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

dull the earpink a bit, it's too bright. and make the nose darker. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and done 00:13, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the chest highlight so it extends over to the right more, and blur it. <span style="">03:57 Thu Oct 6

Extend the tail shading all the way up the left side of the tail. Also, extend the chest shading to the left side of the lineart as well for a correct lightsource. -- 01:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still a little too large; shrink it a tad. 17:34, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Why does ear pink have to be so hard.... 18:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading and darken the shading under the chin. 01:25, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured. I like this. I don't belive that it can get better than this! 01:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink more? 14:58, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The under the chin shading still needs to be darkened, the chesthighlight still needs to be blurred, and add some highlight to the leg thats infront of all the others. 17:47, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

ReuploadedI can't blur the ear pink anymore and I really like it ^^ 01:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks lighter than the pelt. Can you darken it a tad? -- 14:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more triangular, and blur where the shading and the highlights meet. 01:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

As beautiful as this is, it needs to be declined, as it's over the month limit. You can repost this later, but right now it's just taking up space. <span style="">05:22 Tue Oct 11

No, Wildheart. Since Sandstorm only took over on the 29th of September, it doesn't matter when Wildfire started the image. She has one full month, like any other user does. 06:03, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 17:08, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. 17:24, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ack! Sorry Sandstorm! I just skimmed over this and didn't see the point at which you took over. I know you can't blur the earpink anymore, but it's still pretty blotchy. (If you need help blurring, I can blur it.) <span style="">23:54 Tue Oct 11

Blur the shading and earpink a lot. 22:20, October 13, 2011 (UTC) ReuploadedBlured a lot..... I darken the shading a bunch and I also blured and redid the ear pink. Better? 17:09, October 14, 2011 (UTC) '

Darken the nose and the under the chin shading. 18:28, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up into the ear more. 02:27, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bleh the chin shading is hard! 00:41, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it more; its blotchy. 23:02, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tryed my best... 23:20, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the under the chin shading and I'll CBA this. 23:25, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :O :) *Happy face* Tryed my best worked on it for like 15 min xD 01:31, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The neck shading still needs to be blurred. Actually, it majorly needs to be blurred as you can basically see exactly where the burn tool went. The tail shading is also an area you might want to look at. 22:06, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck. 15:05, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ugh I worked on it for a half an hour and i hate it >_< Help? 19:35, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hightlights. 23:33, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Dull and blur the earpink. 12:28, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing Reuploaded Man I'm really hating shading right now! 16:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur around the edge of the chest highlight. 16:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

RuploadedI also smudged the ear pink slightly. I'm still waiting on your word, Iceheart! 18:53, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well you kinda mess up the shading, so lighten the legs and blur all the shading some more and we'll talk. 22:56, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also lighten the chest a tad :-) 00:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading under the left ear. 00:52, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I love all of the comments ^^ 01:31, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:43, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can't blur the highlights any more... 16:49, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still looks blotchy and doesn't flow though. I suggest, you either use the airbrush and smooth the shading out that way, or use the smudge tool and smudge the shading and then blur if needed. 19:48, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Has this been here for over a month?... 19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Not quite. It was taken over on the 29th of September. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  20:03, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

You have to blur it more, it's too sharp to be blurred all the way. Blur the shading/highlight on the chest. -- 22:15, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured and blured and blured... 21:23, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the shading on the tail near the bottom a little lighter? Looks good, by the way. :) . 23:41, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

ReuploadedWhy thank you! 00:59, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the nose color be lighter? 01:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ummm.. No? Well I guess it should show up and somebody told me to darken it too so.. 02:02, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink on <-- this side is too far out of the ear. Try to move more into the ear. Also blur it on both sides. 19:07, October 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Oh please please please get approved... 00:39, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (KP) ~ For Approval
My first image, what do you think? She has a KP name, so i made that image. Comments? Moonkitti 15:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm.. Blur the earpink 15:59, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good for your first image, round the bottom of her ear-pink Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. This is really good for your first image, Moonkitti! 16:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks guys! Changes aren't showing. Moonkitti 16:17, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She has got scar on her left eye but it doesn't matter, i think Leaf-storm,16:36,September 18,2011 (UTC)

I think that is her left eye o.O. Moonkitti 16:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! :D Define the tail highlights. And the scar looks kind of uneven o.O 16:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thanks, and that is because it is blurred. Moonkitti 17:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, changes aren't showing, it should be the 2nd one down. ;) Moonkitti 17:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Put highlights down the forearm, but not all the way to the bottom. 18:40, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The scar goes on her other eye. Her left, not yours. 18:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a bit more. Mi st  y!  19:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Moved her scar over, add a highlight to her forearm, blurred the shading and highlights. Moonkitti 19:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I was fixing some blurred lineart. Moonkitti 01:21, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch and the front leg shading please? (I'm a bit naggy over shading xD) Mi  st  y!  01:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink curve with her head, it'll look more natural. 01:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Did she have a collar in the book? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">The evil juggler! 02:13, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading/highlights to the eyes. 20:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, the scar is on the wrong eye again. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 20:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It probably has to do with the server. Sometimes, the changes will show, and other times they won't. 20:15, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Flossie looks gray. I thought she was supposed to be black.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:14, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights less circular. Think about the muscles where the sun is hitting. That should make it look more natural. 01:12, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

@Kittycat, It is just the highlights. Get right on it. And the image is the 2nd one down. Moonkitti 02:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

And I don't know, so....I just went along with it, i don't have the book, so I can't check, but I'd think not, so should I get rid of it? Moonkitti 02:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Got rid of the colloar, i messed with the highlights and shaing, made her look more black. Moonkitti 02:46, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Love it! Blur the shading and highlights. 15:23, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy and kind of bright. Take it off of an approved black cat, such as Crowfeather 21:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Having no collar sort of gives me the impression that she's naked, but oh well. Blur the part where the highlights meet the shading and vice versa at the middle of her body.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:23, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, Crowfeather isn't black, he is dark gray. Hollyleaf or Shadowstar Would be better. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:51, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot ^^; Yeah, take Maplepool's suggestion instead. 21:09, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-i took the ear-pink from hollyleaf. I've blurred as much as i can on pixril, it is having no effect what-so ever, can someone with gimp do it fro me? Moonkitti 16:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks brown. Make it darker...I can't blur it for you, since I use pixlr too. 23:29, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Moonkitti is spending the night at my house, and what looks brown? She doesn't know..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:30, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

The scar is above her eye, not vertically down. Other than that, very pretty. 13:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye, just wanna let you know, when it says 'over her left eye' it means like, it starts above her left eye, and comes down over her eye, likewhe she closed it, it comes down like that. *Btw this moonkitti, spending the day at Maple's house :3 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 13:08, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a brown streak in the middle of the back. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 16:00, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

No, in the manga, it shows how the scar is placed. 18:56, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I don't have the manga, can you show me a screenshot? Or give me a link to how it looks? Moonkitti 20:53, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye's right. It's a zigzag scar above her left eye. I looked myself. 23:12, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Gosh, i looks bad. DX REuploaded Moonkitti 00:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't. Just move it over a bit and blur it more. 12:12, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Lol, it looks like a pink eyebrow xD Moonkitti 17:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

LOL, wow Moony, only you, my nutty friend, only you xD XD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 17:28, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the scar. It looks like a blob of bubble gum. xD Very good job, Moony! 17:56, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

xD Cloudeh. Uh... define the highlights and blur the earpink. And make the scar like.. a straight line, because if you make it all swirly, (or like bubble gum xD) it might be blotchy. ;3 23:09, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I still say it looks like a eyebrow ;P Give me a few mins, and I'll mess around with it Moonkitti 22:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the scar; its too light. 22:25, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Moonkitti 02:02, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Give the shading depth and blur it. 03:51, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-*faceplam* Wow, I feel SO smart, i thought i uploaded this and i was wondering why i was never getting comments on it, and i can't blur it anymore, it is having 0 affect, can someone with gimp blur it for me?...Moonkitti 20:33, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hey...i don't wanna do this anymore, and I REALLY wanna do Yellowfang's Queen image. If this isn't taken, then i'll do it again, but I love Yellowfang....and yeah..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:50, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Eh..Shellheart's already doing Yellowfang dude :I.... - 20:55, October 1, 2011 (UTC))

MOONKITTI, You are DEAD! Just because you are at my house does NOT MEAN YOU CAN USE MY ACCOUNT WHEN YOU ARE TO LAZY TO GET ON YOURS!!! Your going home, NOW moony! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * rolls eyes* Fine, fine, Maple, chill. Gosh, stop over-reacting. Moonkitti 21:01, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, do not say something like that again. Not here. If I ever catch you doing this on the PCA pages again, I'll be reporting you. If you have a problem with her, talk it up with her on her talk page, or IRL. NOT here. Moon, are you officially withdrawing this then? I'm asking because Shellheart's already taken Yellowfang's queen image. 21:04, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

If she does withdraw this, I would like to take over.. *hungry look in eyes* xD Or are only warriors and up aloud to do that?? o.o (just wondering)  M  i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   21:24, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Cloudy, I just didn't want people to think I'm Moonkitti, i could have been banned for that, for doing nothing. And Moony*Who is still here* is withdrawing this, and Misty, i think you can, not sure thou. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:57, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Misty, if you don't already have something reserved, you may take over. Maple, I understand. Just don't do it again, 'kay? 23:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

So can I just post the image? If so, Reuploaded Hope I did the shading right! M i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   22:40, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the highlights, make them less circular and fit them better with the muscles. 22:45, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Expanded the highlights and tried to make them less circular, how does it look? M i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   23:06, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Niceeee :3 Define the tail highlight. 20:57, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you ^-^ Anything else?

Sorry, that was me xD ^ 23:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed. XD Could you make the eyes like say.... Mitzi's for example? It think she has proper eyes. Other than that I see nothing wrong. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:27, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cross-eyed? Oh well. I changed it, anything else? :3 01:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and make the highlights bigger. Try to make the highlights like Sharpclaw's highlights, or Jake's. 23:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the earpink and made the highlights bigger, but I was confused on your other (request, I guess xD) Should I totally re-do the highlights/shading to copy theirs? 01:30, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yo, heads up, I just wanted to let you know that we're enforcing the date rule on the reservation table. Please add the date you reserved this sometime today. 04:56, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, sorry about that, but I put the date on it. :3 19:45, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, and maybe you should redo the highlights and shading to copy it. Whatever you can do. 00:56, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Felt like I had to redo it, how does it look? I know the earpink looks weird, and I will change that on your request. 01:53, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and blur the shading. 20:10, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the nose needs to be a darker version of the pelt color. 20:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading, but I was wondering if there was any tips on how to dull the highlights without having to re-do them completely... But If I have to, I will. 20:36, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm thinking that you might be able to brush the burn tool over the highlights, if it doesn't darken them too much. If you use layers, then you can just adjust the brightness to the highlight layer. 15:00, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used the burn tool to dull the highlights, how does it look? 16:39, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 17:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look fine to me now, but you really need to blur the edges of the shading as it looks like just big splots of light. Also, extend the highlights along like...half of the tail as it looks odd when it just stops. Nice work. 18:40, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the edges of the shading and extended the tail highlights, though the changes aren't showing.. 21:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the shading and highlights meet. 07:11, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink the slightest bit more 07:34, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred where the highlights and shading meet and the ear pink. :3 13:54, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hightlights on the back needs more blurring! Awe-so-me work! Leaf-storm,18:48,October 10,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it the best I could! Thank you ^-^

Sorry that was me. Dx ^  M  i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   23:12, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading or darken the highlights. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:53, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the shading and highlights meet. 17:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading and where the highlights and shading meet. 21:29, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading/highlights majorly. <span style="">23:49 Tue Oct 11

Reuploaded Blurred best I could using GIMP, how does it look? 19:40, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights blurring. Birdpaw is looking good! 15:17, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs more blurring, and the earpink needs to fit into the ear better. It needs to curve with the ear, and fit just inside the ear, instead of being a small triangle at the base of the ear. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  17:40, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink ,the scar, and the highlights. 22:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

I was waiting for a person to point out my horrible earpink mistake. 'o.o Well, Reuploaded Blurred, blurred, blurred and blurred. x3

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  22:29, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading way more. 16:22, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights and try to smudge the scar over the eye. Really good! 17:11, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, highlights are optional, if you mean to make the highlight's brighter, the user doesn't even have to use highlights at all. Shading is needed, but highlights are the user's choice if he/she wants to use them. Cloudskye doesn't use highlight's and I sometimes don't. Anyway, blur where the shading and highlights meet. 18:38, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

I do have highlights.. But I also had a request (I'll just call it that x3) to dull the highlights. If I just make it brighter, it will come out the same as before that. But do you still want me to make it brighter? Anways, Reuplaoded Blurred it all I could.

Me, again. -_- ^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  22:08, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 23:04, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading, how does it look?

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  20:47, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink and maybe darken the nose. 21:25, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink and darkened the nose.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  22:06, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the overall highlights. 23:37, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate highlights... *huggles shading* Blurred them.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:28, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Just blur the shading some.

For specifics, blur the shading on the face. 00:55, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlight. This looks really good! Moonstorm88 01:03, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred shading and tail highlight. Thanks! ^-^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:41, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are far too blotchy. They need to be shrunk and blurred a lot. I fear they may have to be redone. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:44, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got rid of the highlights and redid the shading. I know the earpink looks demented.. So I'll redo it on someones request.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  18:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

And I don't think its showing..

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  18:17, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I forgot to erase some of the waste around the charart..

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  18:23, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 19:30, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scar somewhat redder 19:45, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

There's bits of waste around the image. I can circle it if you can't see it. 23:39, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shellheart- I reuploaded it a couple of times, since I noticed the waste was still there, so I'll wait for a bit and see if its still there. But if it still shows up, I would be grateful. ^-^ *very bad eyesight* Blurred the earpink and made the scar redder.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:48, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm, there's still waste, and lets see...well it's not near her charart but it's on the very outside of the picture. Dx I hope that made sense to you. Lighten the shading a bit, and possibly add some depth to the eyes. Also, make the earpink a bit smaller on the bottem, and blur it a bit more. :P 00:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made her eyes better (switched them to look like Sharpclaws), fixed the earpink and I'm working on the shading right now. (I'll try to erase/see the waste xD Ah, me and my eyesight.)

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:46, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree with Atelda, I see tons of waster outside the charart. Although, I must say, the shading is amazing. :D. 23:43, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the scar. I can hardly see it. 01:08, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mean darken it? (just want to make sure xD)

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten or darken it; just define it so that its easier to see. 21:55, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the scar, how does the shading look? Changes aren't showing, I think..

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:30, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
My first charart! Yay! Picture: Darkstripe when he was described with a dark gray pelt. Comments? <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. And take the amber eye from his warrior image :3 22:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, so this will have to be declined. Sorry. :( 22:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is the right number now. Define the shading on the tail. 22:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the back leg (the one far away from us) needs shading. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">!  22:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :) Make the eye pupil (the black part) bigger. Also have less shading on the tail tip, or put highlights. 22:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is a female blank, use a male blank. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:46, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll improve it. Sorry Maple took the wrong blank <:3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know if the changes are showing yet... <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:54, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't he already HAVE an alt? Or is that for the black pelt? Also, blur the shading. 22:59, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the pupil and reposition/ blur the ear-pink. 23:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

@cloudskye Black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

He already has a black alt. This needs to be a silver tabby. And I fixed the title for you. 23:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There are actually four alt decriptions of Darkstripe: black, gray, silver tabby, and black with silver stripes (opposite of his real description). Pick one of the three that aren't done. 23:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll do silver tabby, since I already started that :P <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:23, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing he needs an alt for is being ark grey. He is everything else already. Ill decline alll the others. 23:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm confused :( This is a dark gray alt. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:48, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Nevermind, I'm just sticking with this. This is a dark gray alt, not a black one. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  00:04, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sotty. You had just originally said that he was black. 00:17, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kind of small.. Do you have the right sized blank? (or is it just me x3) If its the correct size then blur the shading a bit more. :3 Mi  st  y!  00:33, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I never said he was black! And the changes aren't showing yet. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  01:09, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah fix the highlights and darken the ear pink Good for a try! 03:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yay the changes are actually showing. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  11:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink by blurring it. It's too blotchy. Also, lighten the shading on the paws/legs. :3 12:57, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the title for ya ;3. And darken the highlights. 15:24, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  15:48, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

make the ear pink bigger and darker and also turn down the higjlights on the body and make the one on the face brighter too 22:25, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

center the ear pink <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 01:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are fine, Sandstorm. They just need to be to be blended with the shading more. 05:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur hightlights around a little, good work. I'm working on the silver tabby now. :-) Leaf-storm,20:00,September 27,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry, forgot to say re-uploaded before xD <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:40, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights and define the earpink. 22:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  16:15, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it just a tad more. And maybe try and make the ear pink a tad lighter. Other then taht this is beauitful. Though if you have dodge you can use that to lighten it. Just a helpful tip. :D Rain  face &lt;3 18:55, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing yet. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  19:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 19:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  00:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and lighten the shading on the chest. Looking good! 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good, blur the neck shading (if any, it looks like it though) a tad more. Rain face &lt;3 19:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n21:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight. 22:54, October 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Other than that, looking good! 08:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! :3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 22:10, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still looks blotchy. Try blurring it a little more. 20:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, his shading is kinda covering the shoulder highlights. Please define the highlights on the shoulder where the shading is covering it. (a lot of words, and yes, i speak fast and type fast :P) Rain  face &lt;3 21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded So far so good (in my opinion ^-^). <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 21:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still blotchy, blur the the shading. 16:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink (is there any earpink at all?) and round out the haunch highlight. Also move the shoulder highlight up. <span style="">23:42 Sun Oct 9

Re-uploaded Yes, there is ear-pink. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y    <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 14:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC) a lot Brighten the earpink more and blur the shading/highlights a lot more. Maybe take the earpink colour from Silverstream's current image if you're having trouble. <span style="">21:36 Mon Oct 10

There's not much to comment on except define the earpink (a lot :P) Good job, Lucky. This is really good. :) 21:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks, Twilight :D <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y    <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 22:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, and blur the shading more. 01:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and smooth the shading and highlights; they're really blotchy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:58, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define your light source. The shading on the haunch is inconsistent with the rest of the shading on him and shouldn't be at the bottom, but rather in the middle of his haunch. 15:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. 17:15, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you're smudging the shading einstead of blurring. 07:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * instead 07:53, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm blurring. And since I gotta go, I will work on this the day after tomorrow (maybe) because my dad will be on tomorrow.

The shading is extremely blotchy. Make the highlights larger, define the light source, and blur the highlights. 22:29, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, more pink, define it, and blur it. 15:01, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading on the back is really thick and where is the light sorce? The highlights just seem randomly placed. Tone them down more and blur it. It's blotchy. 17:14, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 22:26, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a week since the last reupload. Shouldn't it be declined? 13:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, this is declined due to lack of work. Anyone without a current normal project may take this over. 16:18, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

May I do it?

Yes. 17:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Thank You I will get started now.

Reuploaded So can someone change it from Declined to For Approval I would've done it but i wasn't sure if i was allowed to. And I know the earpink is horrible.

Changed it. Maybe blur the ear-pink more and define it also. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  18:50, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ugggg my earpink is such a fail.

Center the ear pink and darken the shading. 23:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink larger and darken the ear pink 01:33, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder/chest highlight. 20:52, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The ear pink is too pink and way too small. Try to darken it too. Blur everything and smudge the highlights into the shading more. 19:38, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 16:35, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded

Redden the earpink and define the pupil. <span style="">18:54 Sat Oct 22

Center the ear pink as well. 22:57, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the earpink but the eyes won't cooperate with me so i will do it at a different time.

Blur the shading more on the shoulder and haunch. 00:57, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the shading. -- 02:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Can the highlight (if you have highlights) be made a but bigger and also darkened a little? . 23:46, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 01:10, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval


Ok, second charart. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:15, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, noticed i forgot the ear pink, i'll fix that. Rain face &lt;3 19:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Add nose-pink, blue the highlights, and make them smaller, make the shading larger, and define it, and blur the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, is the black supposed to be shading? If so, please lighten it and blur it. It looks like a whole other tone to the fur. The nose should be dark gray, since Blackclaw is a black cat. 19:24, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur, blur and blur some more. Also, did you get the eye color from either the warrior or elder images? It seems a little off. 19:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this one was a TOTAL fail. gonna re-do it so i can make the shading right and... yea. Everything that you guys said. Rain face &lt;3 19:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Crud monkies! forgot to blur. What else will i forget today? Rain face &lt;3 20:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 20:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better ^-^ Now make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 22:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Take the pelt color from one of his other images, this is a bit too light. Looking great though! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 01:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at it for a REALLY long time (actually, it was only like, 30 seconds :P) and I can't find anything i could complain about. it looks purrfect:P<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 20:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the nose needs to be darker than the pelt, so it should be almost as dark as the lineart. Also, define the shading and blur the earpink more. 21:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks bluey. '''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 23:01, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur blur and blur more (the shading. Everywhere) 01:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 02:22, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to lighten the shading, it looks blacker then it should be. Blend it in with the pelt some more as well. 22:41, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image a bit; right now I can't even tell the lineart from the pelt colour. <span style="">22:40 Thu Oct 6

The shading looks weird. Blend it with the highlights. For an example of a black kit, look at Hollyleaf's kit image (remade by me, funnily enough). 19:50, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my cpu stopped working. I will get started on it. Question, how did you make the chest so bright though? Rain face &lt;3 16:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind. I had to use gimp for it. Re-uploaded. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and also add some earpink. (Hope it's the right one...) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and Treat 05:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope i got it all. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  12:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rain, this is fabulous! Define the earpink a little. I wish I could do a black cat like this one. 20:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, defined more. Thanks Ivy, though i think that you can do amazing black cats also. *gives a hug so she will feel better* Any way, comments? Rainfacestar Vampire time!  01:20, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I think this still looks completely black. It needs to be lightened a lot and then the shading needs to be darkened. <span style="">06:17 Mon Oct 10

Dude, it's not black. It's the dark-gray from the other image. I won't fix it unless someone else argues about it. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  10:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it. It's not completely black, but it's still too dark. 15:28, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you brighten the ear pink just a tad? Not a lot, though. I'm very picky with ear pink.. xD 01:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 06:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think the changes are showing, i only defined the ear-pink a bit so... yea. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  10:38, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Take the ear pink right from his elder or warrior images. They're not the same. 19:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  18:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading/highlights. 22:19, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. 14:55, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  19:29, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and there is a bit of waste on the outside of the neck. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:26, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Think i got it all and blurred the shading. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  00:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The edges of the ear pink come down onto the face. Move them, and the blur the ear pink. 22:28, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *sigh* ear-pink is not my thing, is it? Any way, Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  22:50, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard, I know. Make the ear pink a little more triangular. 22:52, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for understanding Cloudy. Okay, made it more triangular without it touching the lineart. I really do not like ear-pink any more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  23:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looking great so far. Extend the highlights (Or have less shading) on the tail. 19:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the legs is a lot darker then the rest of the shading. I don't think that's supposed to be like that. Make it a tad bit lighter. 21:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, changes aren't showing. They are on the file page, so, look there and Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  22:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Theres waste around the charart get rid of it. 23:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! [ 19:39, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular. 20:51, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  00:26, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and the shading between the front legs. 21:29, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, move the earpink into the ear more and blur it.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:40, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. Or smudge the bottom of it into the top of it. 16:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading a little more. 01:00, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Follow the rest of the comments regarding earpink, then make it a little more pink. Lighten it. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:48, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry for not working on this for a while, i was first at a camp-out (no internet service) and then i was at a sleep-over party last night and i just got back. i am gonna work on this. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  20:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the legs and bottom of the tail looks alot darker than the rest of the shading, could you lighten it or blurr it? . 23:48, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the bottom of the tail. 01:13, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (Q) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:41, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blue the edges of the highlights just a tad. 04:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also, lighten up the earpink too. :P 05:04, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I'll re-do the earpink later 05:16, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Did you fill in the nose? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and Treat 05:27, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nope....I'll go do that now. xP 05:30, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:35, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back stops a bit where the big highlight is. Fix that. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  08:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlight on the tail a bit bigger. 13:52, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Maybe dim the shading just a tad on the stomache. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  01:28, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:41, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. <span style="">06:21 Mon Oct 10

Make the highlights a tad thicker, since she's glossy looking. 23:26, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rainey.... I can't see teh ear pink. Where'd it run away to? Did you eat it? 03:26, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is way better than my version. Maybe darken the highlight on the face a tad, and i agree to make the ear-pink more visible. Great job! -- ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫  18:46, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 11:18, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little. 12:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 11:02, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the middle highlight larger, blur it, and blur the tail highlight. Good job! It looks better than the other version. 22:38, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Still working on this, Rainey? 22:31, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry I'm back from the real life now. I'm still at my friend's house tonight, but I'm going home tomorrow so I'll work on it later. -- 11:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the face highlight. 23:34, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 10:56, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink. 20:49, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:11, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 10:31, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

The highlight on the belly is a too bright. Darken it a bit. 22:21, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 11:17, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink larger and darker so it's somewhat easier to see. Great job! 23:06, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 05:22, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Looking good, Rainey. 16:49, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading. <span style="">19:00 Sat Oct 22

Nice job! Just that her left eye looks funny..

Lighten the ear pink again. Not a lot, just a tad. 01:05, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for helping me Atelda. :3 -- 03:38, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think the highlights look unnatural. Probably just darken them. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:53, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardclaw, she's meant to have bright highlights. It's part of her description. The highlights should stay this bright. However, could you redden the earpink Rainey? Looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  16:13, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's so much that they're bright, more the fact that they're a bit blotchy. Blur them a bit, please. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 11:22, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blurr the shading a bunch, please? It's amazing, by the way. ♥ . 23:51, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I've blurred as much as I could on pixlr. I can't blur anymore. -- 10:53, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok first of all make it look more glossy and do you want some help with blurring? 17:26, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (Q) ~ For Approval
Finally snagged a queen :P Comments? 19:27, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink a little bit Leaf-storm,19:28,October 15,2011 (UTC)

I'll wait for a second opinion on that, since I used the ear pink color from her images. 19:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least lighting the shading on the belly. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  19:34, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the earpink, and blur the shading some more. 19:38, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a little. 23:11, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten all the shading. Add depth to the eye. 23:12, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is a lighter color pixel on the left front paw, blur the shading. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:35, October 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded  12:10, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wind's eyes in her leader charart have a ring of orange in them, which I think makes her stand out in an interesting way. I think you should try to match that. 17:04, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''You'll have to zoom in to see it. 20:31, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The orange was on the outer part, and it was a bold orange... sorry, poking at it. 01:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the ear-pink a tad. 19:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes aren't showing yet 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why should I blur it more? I think it seems fine. 20:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, you will blur the shading more if a more experienced member tells you to. I agree. It needs to have a nice, smooth transition between the lighting planes and blurring it makes this transition looks natural. I know that you're liscensed to have your artistic creativity, but as another fellow artist, I can see that it needs blurred. 21:07, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Even though it seems I didn't blur it, I did. 23:03, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Should I make it more to the color of her ears or just darken it in general? 20:16, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's supposed to be the same as the ear pink.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:17, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes are showing. 21:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Making a small bump. 20:05, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to be the same as the ear-pink, as long as it's not a black cat or anything, which this clearly isn't. Any way, blur and lighten the shading right next to the front arm closes to use. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! [ 20:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading along her back. 20:45, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose color are the same Dark. I took the color from the middle of her ear. And I'll get to it Speckle. 20:55, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok the changes aren't showing. Shading the back is tough D: 21:19, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the tail and blur the shading. 22:31, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Make the pupil skinner. 00:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be some white in the eye as well? 16:29, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll work on this soon. And there is Shadewing. 20:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is a black square in her eye........Otherwise nice job! <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:27, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the shading looks too dark so that parts of the pelt looks brown. Also blur and smudge the ear pink. 00:17, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear oink and define the shading on the tail. 01:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading on this is making me angry ._. I'll live x3. 12:46, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and this will be ready. 22:16, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Safe to say I'm satisfied with the shading for once ^^. 23:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The eye away from us needs a white dot or summin. Otherwise I think it looks good. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 10:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)'''

Blur the ear-pink. 13:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:51, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. <span style="">00:26 Wed Oct 26

Tigerstar (Alt.L2) - For Approval
Ok, I tried match him correctly but I stopped on the stripes. I made him a bit looking like on the covers..please tell me you dont decline this! Leaf-storm,9:18,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Ah! This is beautiful. Make the earpink less purple. <span style="">10:50 Sun Oct 16

Reuploaded - Leaf-storm,11:08,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Add shading. 13:49, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Would he need scars too? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 13:51, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. At least, I would think so. 14:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded, and that scars and torn ear? Leaf-storm,15:00,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes the same color even in the highlights, they look brighter in those places. -- 20:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit more brown. Otherwise this is amazing <3. -- 21:19, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the colors don't really match those on the cover, his base pelt is cream in color and his stripes are darker and don't have that much red in them. 22:38, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, the Ear-pink is to bright and neon pink, darken it and make it more natral? :) . 02:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, i cant match everything but I try... Leaf-storm,13:16,October 17,2011 (UTC)

You can color-pick off of the cover (that's what I did for Millie), at the very least, darken the stripes and make them less red colored. I know you try hard and that's not my point. 13:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I take colour from cover.. Im working on it now Leaf-storm,16:34,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Epic FAIL! Leaf-storm,17:04,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the stripe above his nose. 17:21, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,18:29,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink smudges. 19:15, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

yawn* Im sleeping on my keyboard...Whats? I was thinking they're look good..ok reuploaded Leaf-storm,19:27,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Whoah whoah, wha-? We're doing teh manga alts now? - 22:04, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

@BlueOrca: Yep. Haven't you seen Milie's loner and kittypet manga alts up?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 23:05, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple and more red and blur all the stripes; make sure they're all the same colour, too. Right now it looks like you forgot to change the colour of a couple stripes (mostly on the tail) <span style="">02:09 Tue Oct 18

reuploaded Leaf-storm,17:38,October 18,2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink. 23:37, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur and smudge the stripes and maybe dark it slightly. Make the ear pink darker and tone it done. Also blur everything 01:37, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't repeat what's already been said. You don't need to say blur twice. >.>;; 01:47, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon, maybe take the color from another approved one. Sand, Bro, would ya quit saying to smudge already? Its doesnt really need to unless its really needed and the stripes are dark enough - 01:52, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

ear-pink, my biggest problem xD Leaf-storm,15:04,October 19,2011 (UTC)

I really like the colors on this it is awsome but yes i agree with the others about ear pink. Ac orn  fur 01:08, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should darken the shading. Nice stripes! 22:37, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,12:20,October 21,2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink slightly and try to smudge the pelt into the ear pink slightly. Good job! 16:08, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste right outside the bottom of the haunch in front. 16:26, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded, Shadewing, ehm..what? Leaf-storm,17:36,October 22,2011 (UTC)

There's the smallest bit of waste between where the tail begins and the haunch. It's the small corner. 17:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think I not found it... anything changed? Leaf-storm,18:41,October 22,2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink and make sure all the stripes are the proper colour. You missed several on the tail and legs. <span style="">21:31 Sat Oct 22

I would upload a version of it with the waste circled, but I don't think we're allowed anymore. It's right on the bottom, in between the leg and tail. Fill the background in white or neon, and you should see it. 23:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The right ear pink looks blurred into the face. Can you fix that? 01:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded, Its not blurred, Squirrelflame :-) Leaf-storm,8:51,October 23,2011 (UTC)

Fix where the stripes turn yellow (I believe because of highlights) on the tip of the tail, if I am looking at the correct revision. :3 -- 19:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Im blind xD Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:54,October 25,2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. Dep) - For Approval
]] 18:08, October 16, 2011 (UTC)This is Mistyfoot(star)'s alternate deputy version any comments.

The main body looks great, but the ear pink needs fixing. It needs to be a lighter pink, more central in the ear and more triangular. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  18:13, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be named Mistystar.deputy.alt.png. 18:36, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a lot of blurred lineart, and the correct lineart needs to be black. But the actual colouring is excellent XD 19:21, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's also waste around the entire charart, faint, but still there. 19:24, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you ;) 19:56, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad ^^. Blur the ear pink a lot. 20:27, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think you know where the colored lineart is, so color over that. Other then that, lighten the tail shading a bit. Everything else was already mentioned xD 20:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks gray not black, muzzle looks like half cutted and eye is dusty gray, fix it please, Leaf-storm,20:31,October 16,2011 (UTC)

I have put up the better version fixed the eye and the gray line-art and lightened tail shading. Ac orn  fur 23:58, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller and blur it. There also looks like there are some discolored pixels on her head. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:19, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This also needs to be named File:Mistystar.deputy.alt.png and there still seems to be waste all around the pixil. 02:21, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Good work Acorn, now make ear-pink darker and more triangual, delete this, then made a small triange in the center of ear and blur it. And made new file with this cat named "Mistystar.deputy.alt.png", any other file with uncorrent name can't be approved. Leaf-storm,17:08,October 17,2011 (UTC)

There's a TON of waste around the pixel. And the earpink is touching the lineart. Cute 17:26, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

You've done a good job, but the ear pink is way too big and needs to be darkened, too. Appropriately name the file (Mistystar.deputy.alt.png). Wuahahaha! <font color="orange" style="background:black;"> Yup. I've been working on my evil laugh. &gt;:D 18:27, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Please stop mentioning the file name. It's been said four times, and I think that's enough. 19:16, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart still looks a bit gray on the ears, can you fix that? :3 And get a transparent background. (I believe that it has just a white background, but if I'm wrong, my apologies)

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  21:14, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

There i made the lineart darker and made the ear pink smaller and a bit darker. Ac orn  fur 21:50, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh Acornfur, you can just say Reuploaded when you upload the new file. ;) Dull the earpink and smooth it out. 22:51, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the waste. 23:38, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

This file needs to be named Mistyfoot.deputy.alt.png. 15:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the highlight on the tail? 20:38, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

As said, the file needs to be renamed. There's a bit of waste in the triangle between the haunch and the front paws. 20:46, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded Ac  orn  fur 01:09, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple. The tail and head also need more visible highlights. 22:39, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ac  orn  fur 00:12, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste/blurred lineart near the muzzle and where starts(?).. And is this a transparent image?

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:38, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's some miss-coloured lineart near the base of the tail. 16:32, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye. 20:07, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is much too small. Make it larger and darken it, it would look better with the pelt. 23:10, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

The tail lineart is also blurred. 12:23, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Ac  orn  fur 15:31, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purplish, blur it, and make it more triangular. 16:40, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink should actually be more a pink/red. 18:58, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and erase the waste. Make sure the lineart is all completely black as some of it looks blurred and lightened. <span style="">19:06 Sat Oct 22

Beautiful! Just fix the earpink.

I'm not trying to be mean, but unless you fix the waste on the lineart and blur the earpink, it should jsut be given to someone else. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 23:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Regi, that was a little uncalled for. Acornfur has a month to finish the image. 23:48, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Give the eye more depth instead of just one color. 01:14, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

For the depth, it basically means to put a darker color on the highest pixel. My Daisytail warrior image should show a good example of that. 19:41, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) ~ For Approval
I hope this doesn't get declined. Anyways, I think Dappletail gets a queen image, according to the new rule. 00:07, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Good job! But blur the striped a bit more, define the earpink and lighten the shading just a tad on the white.
 * cries of the awesome beauty* The stripes need to be more orangy though. xD<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 00:10, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:27, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose look less whiteish, more pink. :) 00:31, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

You're right, she gets one under the new rule as she was mentioned with kits. Her earpink should be the same color as on the other chararts, though. 00:42, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. :) Blur the stripes more, lighten the earpink a tad. Wuahahaha! <font color="orange" style="background:black;"> Yup. I've been working on my evil laugh. &gt;:D  00:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse. 01:13, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Erase or thin out a few lines so they match the original image. <span style="">02:05 Tue Oct 18

I agree with Wildheart, the lines look too thick. . 03:56, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

When you fix the lines, blur them more too. -- 20:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blur, blur, and blur. -- 22:34, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the lines more. -- 10:57, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink. 20:31, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a front white paw?

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  20:50, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh derp, yeah. I erased it while I was fixing the stripes. And Speckle, I don't think I should. It's from the other images. -- 21:23, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the era pink. 21:42, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I also agree that the earpink should be made more visible. The tail needs some highlights as well. It looks really nice!! 22:49, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back paws, please. :3 -- 04:19, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so lazy :P -- 20:12, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paws, and she needs a front left white paw. 20:47, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Xcf. files changed my skills :P -- 20:58, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Try to separate the stripes more because they look to...close together. Also smudge the stripes and ear pink. Also darken the ear pink the slightest bit. 23:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

You need to lighten the ear pink, not darken it. Take it right from her elder image. 03:14, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the stripes and the earpink. -- 12:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's stripes going out, erase those. xD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 12:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

After you erase the waste, blur the stripes more.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:41, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Derp. -- 12:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Define the earpink. 16:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the stripes a tad and make them more orange so they match her elder image. <span style="">19:09 Sat Oct 22

Her stripes kind of look like they are fading from left to right. Also, are there stripes on the legs? If not, add them. 23:32, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a tad. 01:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. -- 20:31, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes. <span style="">00:13 Mon Oct 24

Reuploaded I redid it. -- 12:07, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The paw i belive is supposed to be white and make it slightly longer and blur it too. 00:42, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her white paw.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar Alt. (D) ~ For Approval
Okay, so, I do realize the shading looks stiff and un-blurred, but i've blurred it to the max on GIMP. Also, The tawny reference is from Oakhearts tawny color, and i've posted a cite on Leopardstar's page already. Comments? :S. 01:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename the file Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png and put delete tags on the other images you uploaded. Add some shading under the jaw and brighten the earpink. <span style="">01:10 Tue Oct 18

How do I add an image when it's in source mode? :S. 01:18, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

On the bar (where you would get your signature) press the button that looks like a picture fame, and then put the name of the file into the part where it says: "Example.jpg". ^-^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay...Reuploaded Thanks. . 01:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

nooo, name it Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png(its case sensative) :|- 01:52, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oi. That was....way too much work. It shouldn't have been like that. xD. 02:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

xD Redden the earpink as it almost blends in with the pelt. Maybe blur the edges of the shading, but otherwise this looks great! 02:19, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Again, way too much work. xD Anyway, fixing the charart itself was pretty easy. And BlueOrca, it should have been Leopardstar.deputy.alt2 becuase it just made another file of the first alt. :3 Reuploaded.. 02:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 18:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the head a bit. 20:11, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I think it reuploaded.. 00:40, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur shading. 00:56, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading? You should also define the shading on the tail and make the earpink smaller. 22:51, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the earpink. 12:20, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good. Lighten the shading and also smudge the ear pink and shading too. 16:09, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Omg this is so pretty! Just lighten the shading.

Lighten the ear pink a little. 01:18, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erm...I accidentially closed the tab and lost all my layers, i'm working on re-doing it. . 06:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud (alt.E) ~ For Approval
Cloud was described as pale gray instead of white. Comments? 22:15, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the gray. It's too dark to be pale. 22:35, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think the gray is perfectly fine. Just brighten the high lights but if you dont use them, lighten the parts where the highlights would be ^^ - 23:43, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

The gray needs to be darker than her current white charart, so this gray is fine. Just blur the tail highlights. 23:45, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

More the earpink more towards the front part of her ear. 00:16, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. ^-^ But blur the earpink a lot.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:36, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

You guys explain to me how that shade of gray is pale? Oh, wait. It's not. A pale gray would be like Cloud With Star In Belly. This is just simply gray. Yes, it needs to be darker then white, but not this much. Squirrel, please change it. 14:38, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Skye is right. Anyway, blur the earpink and define the shading. 15:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:12, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tad. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 10:57, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it as well. Maybe move it farther into the ear too. 12:19, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading along the tail. 18:48, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:52, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and dull the earpink. <span style="">21:20 Sat Oct 22

Re-uploaded. 22:21, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink. 23:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:21, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the lineart dark gray rather than black? Also, could you blur the belly shading. 10:10, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think it was just you. :P 21:59, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Her current white image is darker than this, so shouldn't this be darkened? 23:26, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Why're you asking us? It's your image :3 But yeah, it should be darkened. <span style="">00:18 Mon Oct 24

Really? Because Cloudy wanted it really pale, so I made it this pale. When it was darker than the original image, Cloudy said it should have been paler. 00:27, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Cloudy. I realize I just stuck the blame on you when I only meant to clarify what the image should look like. :) 04:22, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Personally, I think pale gray and white are almost the same thing, but, it's been up for this long, so why decline it? Also, no worries. It was way too dark, and I'm not the only one that though that. You had it as a regular gray. XD 17:57, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

This color is fine. I think we should just tweak the original image to be pure white. 22:09, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

That's not that bad of an idea, actually. Now, back to comments. Blur the edges of the ear pink just a bit, as well as blur the shading on the back. 22:11, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:29, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can youblurr the shading around the the outer curve on the haunch? . 13:15, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:09, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) - CBA
Let's try again. Ivy said I could have her. `<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 23:39, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 23:45, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't really want to change it too much from the warrior.... <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 23:52, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

A bit of waste is on the right side of the tail. Lovely, Sky. ^_^ 23:55, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nah, yours woulda been better. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 23:58, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

That one lighter patch of fur on the haunch is sorta bothering me. Can you add a small bit of shading or something to it, so it doesn't seem so bright and out of place? 15:01, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Try to have some more white there, like her other images. Also darken and brighten the ear pink. Also darken the shading and blur and smudge it too. 19:41, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that the amount of white is fine, though, in her warrior image, I believe it has a white muzzle. Correct me if I'm wrong. Also, how do you darken and brighten the earpink. Wonderful, Sky. 20:14, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Bleh sorry! I meant darken the ear pink and brighten the patches. *face paws* darn 23:18, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''It's the same amount of white, but I added a white muzzle, and the patches are supposed to be dark where they're in the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 01:01, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

On her tail, a bit of the giner went outside the lineart. 15:57, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading on the belly. 18:28, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Shadeh. Also the ear pink is sorta bright....If you think I'm wrong don't hate.... 19:00, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink color looks fine to me. 19:03, October 22, 2011

By our newer rules her orange patches need stripes, don't they? I imageine her warrior image can be added to the tweak list for this. 19:19, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, Iceheart said it's up to you. So, you know, do whatever you think is best. 19:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define and thicken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:31, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think you could put in one more spot on the belly because that spot just looks blank. Other than that Awesome Job! <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Would tortoiseshell qualify for the stripes thing? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:21, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white on the ear. 01:25, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white on the ear and muzzle into the pelt a little. 01:36, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. I really like this one! :)

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  13:37, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

You need to smudge the white on the tail onto the pelt and maybe the other patch. Good. 16:53, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, smudging isn't needed, as it should match her warrior charart. 21:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

So comes the all important question. CBA? 17:58, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the markings a bit and I'll agree with Cloudskye. :3 <span style="">02:54 Tue Oct 25

Re-uploaded. I will nom you for interrupting CBA. >:D <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 19:52, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. 21:53, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ CBA
Comments? 00:34, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't her leg be twisted, or am I just missing something? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:37, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're right, it should be. You should use the lineart from her existing charart. 00:57, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

If you aren't using layers and don't want to, I can paste the lineart over your image so it has the leg. 00:58, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

For later notice, darken the shading on the legs ;3 02:42, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

And probably blur too. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 02:44, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, @Ivyheart: can you help me do the foot? I don't use layers. RE-Uploaded. Fixed leg shading. 22:32, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I will. I'm on it! 02:19, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Did the foot. How'd I do? 02:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is stunning! Darken the shading on the back and blur the shading on the tail. 18:27, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad. Good job with the lineart, Ivy! Beautiful stripes, Misty :3 <span style="">19:21 Sat Oct 22

Thicken and darken the shading. 23:07, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

this is amazing! Just fix the earopink.

Be specific on how she fixes the earpink. 19:51, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and make it more triangular, then blur it.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 22:08, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, don't enlarge the earpink. And it's the perfect colour, just make it a bit more triangular.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 22:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ` 21:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. CBA? <span style="">02:57 Tue Oct 25

Leafstar (Alt. L) ~ For Approval
I hope this doesn't get declined. I know it sucks. Comments? 21:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

We've already decided she doesn't get a manga alt. I think this will be declined. Plus, if you were going by the manga it should match exactly. 21:19, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

pfffft it doesnt suck but if we are gonna keep this up, You should make it look more like how she is in the manga. Like maybe lighten the white because it looks too gray and lighten the patches. Make it look more like how Moonstream did it: - 21:26, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think Ivy's right, but, if we do keep it up, the white should be more cream colored. Not like Daisy, but, just not white. xD 21:38, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hope this stays up, I made it match the manga image, and made it more cream colored. 21:53, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's very pretty, but the last one was declined so... But honestly, Leafstar looked tabby and white on the manga covers. I saw no tint at all in the white parts save for gray shading. 21:54, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

...I said not completely cream. Jeez. She wasn't pure white. It's like...this off-white/very light cream color... 22:01, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

If you say so. Everyone has a different perspective. Anyway, if this stays I say lighten the shading on the front legs and add some depth to her eyes. 22:05, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color match the ear pink. 22:45, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The earpink and nose color are allready the same, for everything else, changes are hardly showing. 23:30, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say we wait to see what Iceheart says but I'm pretty sure it won't. Don't make the shading so dramatic on the paws, tone it down please. 23:41, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Epic failure. 00:47, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, if this stays up, then maybe adding some shading to her back paw.. It seems just plain white.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

It's still too creamy. Make it more offwhite. 00:56, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, add more depth to the eye color. Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:13, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it's getting better.... 01:17, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

It might just be me, or is there some colour that leaked from our <--- haunch onto our <--- front leg? 02:03, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighen the cream to the color of her on the manga cover of "The Rescue". 11:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ummm if this is the alt shouldn't the pelt patches be in a different place? if so one on the chest would be good. Also smudge the tail. It looks unnatural. 21:26, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

No Sandstorm, alts taken from pictures need to match the pictures exactly. This is Leafstar from the manga. 21:28, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a stray line on the left side of the image. 21:34, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the image. Hopefully, this one is better. Sorry for the straight line, it was the letter I. I think the tail is fine. Smudging the tail would be smudging the whole tail. 23:35, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Lighten up the shading a tad. 23:36, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to, you can connect a stripe or two to another stripe on her hind leg. 23:47, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink should be a little less red. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:50, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

ReUploaded. I lightened the shading a tad and connected a stripe. Changes aren't showing for the earpink. 14:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Er, I really hate to say this but the white should be cream because she was described as a cream and brown tabby...*cowers in fear of being whacked for making you change it* Oh and lighten the white shading (even though you're gonna hafta fix it anyway to be cream) and make the eyes less red and evil looking. Also lighten the tabby part of her. This is really pretty, anyway. 17:22, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

No because her colors are tabby and white on the cover of the Rescue. Define the stripes on the face, particularily the ones that surround her eyes. That's one thing I liked about her manga apperance. 17:33, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 23:37, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (Ki) - For Approval
I really dislike how this one looks compared to the warrior image, but... hopefully you guys can tell me what I did wrong XD Comments? <span style="">23:06 Sun Oct 23

Sedgecreek's a girl xD - 23:15, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink on the shaded side :3 -- 23:23, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make a couple of the stripes a little more... not wavy, but just some not so straight. xD Nice! 23:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded AHDURH how did I miss that?? I think the stripes look fine as they are, but if someone else tells me to change them, I will. <span style="">04:35 Mon Oct 24

Maybe smudge the stripes ever-so-slightly like the other chararts? 20:28, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ugh I really don't like this image... Comments? <span style="">05:02 Tue Oct 25

Mitzi (KP) (Q) - For Approval
Since Cloud and Poppycloud get queen images, Mitzi pretty much does too. Comments? 01:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the collar on the back, define the shading on the haunch, and make the smudging more noticable, wonderful, Moonleaf! 01:40, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) 01:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the shading on the white, and outer end of the collar less circular. Oh, and add some shading to it too - 02:11, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Let's see how long this will take to get approved... 13:44, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The color tag thing that holds the tag, I dunno what to cal it, is gray. Make it black. 02:01, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her tail and her front left leg. 08:21, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded If I make it black, it wouldn't be distinguishable from the lineart, so I'm leaving it like that. 17:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the collar just doesn't make sense. It's defying gravity XD you need to move it down quite a bit on the neck and then it'll look more... sensical :3 <span style="">00:30 Wed Oct 26

Reuploaded I tried something like this, but I don't know if I like it or not. 01:22, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. W) - CBA
Whoopie! Tortie fail! If we're doing alt.s for manga, I see no reason why not to make one for the Field Guide Series. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:23, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the paws and more near the tail. Also, enlarge the ear pink, and if you're doing highlights, add one to the front feet. 04:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the markings a bit, and blur where the shading meets the highlight on the chest. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger patches more orange, like her CotC image, and maybe smudge the patches a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the black partch over her eyes was a bit bigger on the cover of BotC. But that's just my interpretation, it looks excellent, Scarlet! 19:03, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:39, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste and blur the shading, then it'll be perfect :3 <span style="">02:58 Tue Oct 25

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:11, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? <span style="">05:03 Tue Oct 25

Dawn River (Q) ~ For Approval
Comments? 18:56, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more. 20:15, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:21, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! I knew someone would go for this one. Darken the shading a bit, like the other image, which is a tad darker. 00:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a tad. This is gorgeous! <span style="">02:59 Tue Oct 25

Re-uploaded Thanks! 08:18, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink now? 01:32, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Littlecloud (Alt. MC) ~ For Approval
Took the brown color from the picture, as well as the eyes.Comments? 05:02, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job! Dull the earpink a tad and blur it. Darken the shading on the herbs. <span style="">05:04 Tue Oct 25

Good job! The one herb piece needs to be darker too, the left side is lighter. 15:14, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten the chest shading. 20:19, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

This looks beautiful! Make the tail-tip more white, it looks pinky XD -- ɛɱ ɱɛy!  22:14, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes blend in the white on the chest. And I agree with the tail tip. 00:44, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (Q)~ For Approval
If Wind gets one so does she. Comments? 23:25, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Was she mentioned as having kits? I don't remember... <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 23:27, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well, she has decendants, so she must have had kits. Great work! darken the tail shading. 23:30, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well, no, not necessarily. For all we know, she could have become a medicine cat, not bearing kits, and instead Gorseclaw, her brother, could have fathered kits, and she'd be the aunt of many cats. 23:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Their family tree says that she had kits... 23:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

On the website? The official website isn't reliable. Look, unless it says somewhere that she had kits, we cannot conclusively say that she had them. 23:36, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Good point. Then, should this be declined? 23:39, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I say wait and see if anyone has citational proof that she mothered kits. However, I would hate to see this get declined =( 00:04, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least lighten the white on the back paw. x3 00:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

There is no proof that she had kits. We don't know she was a mother. This will be declined if a proper citation cannot be found saying she mothered kits. 00:49, October 26, 2011 (UTC)