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Tangleburr (Kit) - For Approval
First charart since joining again. Comments? 21:19 Fri Jun 6

I'm sorry but since you reserved after posting this, it may have to be declined... I may be wrong, though, so don't shoot me if I am. 21:30, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

-Shrug- Oh well. My chararts aren't good anyway ;~; 21:31 Fri Jun 6

Nah, it was only a couple minutes, as seen here, and sometimes it takes that long to post an edit somewhere. I think Cloud should be allowed to keep the image. I'd have no complaints. Some people forget the dates at first too and we let them slide.

Okie, just had to check~ ask Berry for the file of one of the other images, I believe Berry did those ones, so that you can get the colours precise; it looks a little lighter than the warrior, but it could just be my kindle. Define your shading and texture too. Don't you say that your chararts aren't good, Whisker; honestly, this is great, for your first in a long time! 21:49, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

I asked her, now I have to wait xD thanks sorrel   22:01 Fri Jun 6

Re-up. Shading is a bit better, I think. Also defined texture. 22:24 Fri Jun 6

Define the texture a bit more? 21:37, 06/7/2014

Re-up. Also defined texture on patches. 23:01 Sat Jun 7

Sharpen and thin out the shading a lot. 20:26, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I oculdn't really sharpen it, but re-upload anyway~ 23:32 Sun Jun 8

Define the shading; it appears a bit flat.

Re-up 22:06 Thu Jun 12

Try darkening and defining the brown patches. Look at the warrior and rogue for reference. Try smudging them with a size one brush - but not too much, though! 14:13, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the gray a touch and define, not darken, the shading. 18:13, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up 22:13 Sun Jun 15

So sorry about the lack of comments, dear. Did you get the .xcf? The patches of brown are more sharp and darker on the warrior. 15:43, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. And no, I still haven't got the. xcf file from Berry. 14:33 Sat Jun 28

define and sharpen the overall texture 02:05, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up 10:36 Tue Jul 1

Smudge the brown patches on the shoulders and chest just a bit more. 17:58 Thu Jul 3

Re-up. i really hope this gets approved so I can work on Tansy ._. 21:19 Thu Jul 3

Sharpen the patches and add some light/depth to the shading, especially on the main part of the body. Also, do you mind changing your timestamp to a larger and more visible coloring/format? I can't see it at all, hence the lack of comments on your image, which I apologize for as well.

Re-up. 11:37 Sat Jul 5

Jackdaw's Cry (Star) ~ For Approval
Yay. :3 Comments?

Define/darken the shading, and could you smudge it so that it flows with the fur? Those are some really amazing eyes. 16:39 Thu Jun 12

Smudging the shading isn't mandatory. =/ Idk what everyone's thing is with smudging but not everyone does it

No, that's not it. I can clearly see that the shading is smudged, so I'm only suggesting that it be smudged in the way of the fur. ;) <span style="">18:07 Thu Jun 12

Add the texture. It's a bit faint, but it is there. 19:12, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay then. It doesn't look smudged to me but whatever. o.O

Re-up ~ I thought nobody would see I smudged the shading a little bit, but oh well. XD I'm not really good at smudging shading so I added a very thin layer of highlight and smudged that, but it's hard to see on a black cat. And Bbun, what do you mean with texture? Sorry, I'm from the Netherlands so my English may not be really good. ^_^"

As in, the dark black "stripes" on his rogue. Those are texture. Please add it ^^;;. 18:16, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Hope I got what you meant. :3

Darken and define the texture. I can barely see it. 14:10, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ I tried, but I don't know if it's better now. :/

Darken the opacity on the texture - it should be slightly darker than the base coat. 18:56, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Tried again. I also added a little bit more highlight. I don't know if I do it good 'cause I never worked with texture on cats before.

Define the texture on the face, chest, and legs. 17:39, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Sorry that I'm often a bit late with it. ^^'

If he's a black cat he should have a black nose, unless his other chararts are like that. 17:14, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Made his nose black.

Define the shading some, and smudge the texture a bit to match the rogue. 18:23, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Yup.

Darken/define the shading summore and this will be good. 14:14, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Darkened the shading. I hope the edges aren't too dark. ^^

Actually, blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch, below the head, and a teeny bit on the shoulder/chest area. 14:12, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the texture jusssst a tiny bit. <span style="">17:59 Thu Jul 3

Re-up ~ Blurred the mentioned places. c: And Hawk, do I have to lighten the highlights or the texture stripes?

The texture. A slide of 5 or 6 on the opacity bar should do the trick. <span style="">22:43 Fri Jul 4

Frostfur (Q) - For Approval
- All colors came from her star clan 01:41, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the tail shading. 13:36, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:14, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the highlights on the belly.

Re-uploaded 14:57, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Don't darken but define the shading a touch 23:23, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:25, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define it more on her front legs? 01:26, June 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the belly shading Brick  10:14, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:07, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on her tail seems gray. Just lighten it a tiny bit. <span style="">18:00 Thu Jul 3

I think blurring the shading might actually fix that. Instead of lightening it, try to smooth the transition between the shading and where it stops. I've done that before and it seems to have worked out pretty well before.

Snowbird(Q) - For Approval
love dat name does anyone remember snow bird from dr quinn medicine woman? 18:36, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and blur it a lot.

Define the light source on the face. <span style="">17:52 Wed Jun 25

re-uplaoded 04:05, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more on the belly.

re-uploaded 21:34, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the face shading. 18:57, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

re-uplaoded 23:01, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the facial shading a bit and blur the body shading.

re-uploaded' 15:24, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

If you use highlights, would you object to adding a small one on the chest? I'm having a hard time telling apart the shading from the base. If your source means that this area wouldn't be as bright, then disregard my comment.

Ashfoot (Queen) ~ For Approval
She needed a queen image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:03, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Please use File:Ashfoot.queen.png to upload. The image needs to be named as such so it works properly with the charart template. Also try and give a little bit more shape to the facial shading and define the light on the tail.

'''Re-up. '''Sorry Snow. Uploaded it to that file, Shaped the facial shading, also darkened the shading on her legs and added the light on her tail.

If the changes arent showing up, go here: http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Ashfoot.queen.png~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:22, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

If changes aren't showing, ezimba.com is a good site. 15:48, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. Those eyes are amazing. *.* <span style="">17:51 Wed Jun 25

Re-up. Defined light on her legs. Better? Not sure if changes are showing.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:47, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit.

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:21, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on the hind legs, and add some depth to the facial shading. 22:07, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Defined shading and light on her legs, and added depth to her face shading. Is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:34, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on that one hind leg furthest from us - there'd be light there - and there is shading receding from the side of the face. 14:13, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Dawncloud (Star) ~ For Approval
ew; look here for changes; colours are from the kit image. 16:01, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Try making the back stripe curve more. As in, the one that runs along her spine. An example of this can be seem on Hawk Swoop's StarClan image. 16:06, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Sorrel, this is honestly an amazing charart. Love those eyes *.* <span style="">17:00 Wed Jun 25

Reups changes obrigado~

Define the shading on the face. 20:40, June 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 15:30, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

this may be impossible but can you define the earpink in his left ear? 16:17, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Reups you mean 'her' c: 19:17, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us. Amazing charart :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:35, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reups thank you very much ;) 21:21, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face a bit. 16:57, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 21:21, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Ryestalk (Q) - For Approval
Here we go. All colourpicked from the warrior image. Leafstrike Talk  22:53, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Curcle the stripes on the back leg closest to us some. 22:57, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  23:21, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the belly and tail. <span style="">16:16 Fri Jun 27

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  00:58, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit? 15:38, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

I think it looks fine to me. Leafstrike Talk  22:00, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna slide in here and agree with Sorrel. Could you also try and blur the edges of the stripes on a really low setting. That's what I did for the warrior. ^^

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  05:08, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the shoulder facing us. <span style="">18:02 Thu Jul 3

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  00:01, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Sunfish (Q) ~ For Approval
So like, apparently you can have a redone queen AND something else for approval now? I did not know this. Buuut here. All colors from the Warrior.

If I messed this up in any way feel free to shoot me <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:46, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on all four legs. 16:57, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define tail and belly shading. Brick 19:10, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

lighten her up a bit 23:21, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 07:46, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on that hind leg furthest to us - there'd be ligh tni that position. 14:12, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:46, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit, and perhaps make the light on the belly a little more visible? Ah, I wish Sunfish had gotten more screen time, I like her. ;-;

'''Re-uploaded. '''I agree, she should have had more time V_V. In case changes don't show, have a link. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:26, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Q) - For Approval
Ding. Despite me color picking, the color still feels off... so I'm gonna play with that.

Re-uploaded. Color-picked again.

hm, it doesn't look too far off but I think it's the shading color on the sharpclaw, it looks like maybe a black or very very dark red, almost black, shading x3 23:27, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

I really don't want to use black on this, though. Using black on a color like this makes it look green (like the other one is starting to look) and I think the sharpclaw needs tweaking for flat shading anyways.. idk, but I really don't want to tweak the color on the shading. I thought tint didn't have to match? idk

oh oops, I didn't mean for you to change anything, you just said that the color feels off, and I wanted to help? sorry, I didn't clarify 23:32, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, it's fine. I thought you were asking me to change it. I color picked from like four different areas on both the queen and the sharpclaw and they all gave me around this color. I'll use black, but only if it looks that off.

define don't darken the shading on the face and her front left leg 16:20, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the chest. 14:11, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Birdflight (Q) - For Approval
The shading could use some work, but I'm pretty happy with the striping. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:09, June 29, 2014 (UTC)

define the overall shading 02:04, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Defined - ish. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:48, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

This is neat. .o. Darken the overall shading.

Darkened. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:50, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the leg shading a bit. 17:15, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her front legs, and on her face.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:59, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:38, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading some more. This is also pretty by the way :3 13:59, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Tail shading has been blurred. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 15:15, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Does the chest area have shading? I can't tell. Also darken only the belly shading, if you don't mind.

Chest has been shaded, and the belly darkened a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:33, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Falling Feather (Star) ~ For Approval
I really like the purple shading. All pelt colors from the rogue image. It is quite a shame she died. Why are all of the good characters dying argh <span style="">1:45 Mon Jun 30

can you expand the unshaded areas? 02:03, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face a tad. bootiful  Brick   10:13, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Try making the texture match the rogue more. I recommend asking Scar for the file for the rogue. 14:59, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not happy with this. Thank you. <span style="">15:28 Mon Jun 30

as it is now, the way the shading is smudged makes her looks kinda mottled, can you fix that? 16:19, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is this better? <span style="">16:53 Mon Jun 30

The texture kinda looks like stripes... That's actually what I thought they were at first.

Re-uploaded. This is as much as I can do without making it look like stripes. <span style="">16:21 Thu Jul 3

could you possibly lighten the shading a bit or lessen it or something? everytime i scroll past it she looks almost more purple than white 23:30, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">1:42 Sat Jul 5

Featherwhisker (Star) ~ For Approval
He needed a starclan image. Colorpicked from his Medicine cat image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:53, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Next time, please wait until someone archives your previous image before posting a new one. As for this one, define the shading and darken it.

Don't the whiskers need to be longer? Brick 10:23, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe just a few pixels longer. 15:36, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Made whiskers a few more pixels longer and darkened/defined the shading. Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:42, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define and add some depth to the shading. Nice! 14:16, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Defined and added depth to his shading. is that better? and thank you, Bbun :).~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:56, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and forelegs. <span style="">19:04 Wed Jul 2

Re-up. Defined the light on his tail and forelegs. is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:53, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, could you perhaps darken his base pelt by about a shade or two? This appears to be slightly lighter than his MC. Other than that, this is looking pretty stellar. Well done, Breezeheart. =)

Re-uploaded. It wasnt his base coat; it was his highlights making him look a bit paler. I turned the opacity down a bit. Is that better? And thank you Snow; that means alot. :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Yup! That looks much better, dear. =3 Just define the shading on his visible paws, and I think this'll be pretty good to go.

Re-uploaded. Defined the shading on his front paws. Thank you :3--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:17, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

As I said, let's go CBA with this. It looks really really good and I know the CBA is well-deserved.

Sorryy to interrupt, but just define his facial shading some, since I can see a bit leaking from his face, and this can go back on CBA. 14:02, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
Just colorpicked from Paleh's, but brightened that muzzle up. Comments? 16:55, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her face a tad bit more? Also, maybe lighten the shading a tiny bit, It looks rather dark.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:58, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

re-up I'll leave the shading darkness as-is unless told to by someone else, as it'd make her look flat. 19:10, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source on the face. Maybe getting rid of that line beside the <<< eye (our left) would help. Dem eyes tho *.* <span style="">18:06 Thu Jul 3

I think it's fine. The line is the shading for the cat's cheekbone, I believe, so it'd be there while parts of the face are in light. 18:10, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

thin it out some, her cheekbone wouldn't have that big of a shadow 03:19, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 03:37, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading, or smudge it, whichever you use. It appears to end quite abruptly. Also, lightening it by a few percents on the opacity bar probably wouldn't hurt, but that's your choice if you want to do it or not.

re-up smudged where it was needed 14:43, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (A) ~ For Approval
Uuuughhh, the markings and texture were annoying. Especially the texture. I've never done texture before- I had to guess. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:09, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Did you get the file from Berry? If not, I strongly recommend it. 17:11, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

No, I colorpicked from the Warrior. I'll go ask for the file ^_^ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and light.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:19, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the colors on this match well enough. Defining the light and shading like Breezeheart suggested might fix the colors not quite looking exactly the same.

'''Re-uploaded. '''I hate shading apprentices so much o_o

In case changes don't show, here. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:19, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (A) - For Approval
i like this comments? 18:19, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make his markings look more fish-like? 18:30, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

well, i tried already, this is a pike. that's what i tried to base this off of, and in other images the spots are bigger, basically there's not to great of a consistent pattern in the mottles in northern pikes, which is what i want to base this off of because of his name. 18:35, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make them vary in size, though? I love pike and it's kinda cool we got his gender confirmed

Blur the shadong some? <span style="">22:05, 07/1/2014

Re-uploaded I didn't erase any of the mottles I had but i added a new layer and added smaller mottles in a new layer 22:57, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">18:07 Thu Jul 3

Darken it too.

Re-uploaded 01:39, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Do you mind making the ear pink slightly less pink? It seems kinda bright for this pelt color. Also, there's some waste around the image. =P

re-uploaded i hate waste ugh 03:19, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the feets? I think I might actually be a five year old; I'm saying "feets" lmao.

Swiftbreeze (Q) ~ For Approval
Meh. <span style="">23:28 Wed Jul 2

The white is looking very gray, especially on the tail tip and paws. 23:32, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">1:08 Thu Jul 3

Still looks pretty gray imho. Also blur the stripes just a little bit.

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:47 Thu Jul 3

Her belly looks gray.. lighten that up a bit?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:18, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:46 Fri Jul 4

seriously people there's shading on her, of course she's gonna look a bit gray. e.e Beautiful work, Hawk, just define the shading on her legs 23:26, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you for your support, duck. <span style="">1:41 Sat Jul 5

Yes, Duck, but there comes a point where the shading is too dark on some places. Define the light and shading on her tail. Looks great, Hawk :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:09, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I'm just gonna say that yes, it can look gray, but it is more than possible to shade white and still have it look white. There's no need for "e.e" or something like that, so knock it off instead of acting annoyed when a critique is offered. If you believe it's fine, then respectfully decline the critique. The emotes which imply you're pretty annoyed is unnecessary- doesn't matter if you agree or disagree- we're supposed to be getting along, and Breezeheart is correct. There are times where sometimes the shading is just too dark- but that is a matter of opinion and artist's style, which the whole point of PCA is to bring together those styles to make art..not to bicker about whether or not something is right or wrong. Yes, the belly is gray, but I was talking more about the paws in my comment, which would have some light on them. I also know some people use off-white, which also contributes to it looking grayer than normal.

Molepaw (Star) - For Approval
Hello. Molepaw is adorable.

Shouldn't there be a bit more grey on his paws, like on his kit and apprentice? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 23:30, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I misunderestimated how much gray were on his paws. =P

Define the light on his tail a bit?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:12, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Possibly smudge the earpink into the fur a bit more?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:56, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

It's actually smudged quite a fair bit, but I tried something different this time to give it some variety.

Oh. ignore that comment, then. I couldnt tell when its not zoomed up that close. This looks really good. :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:04, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Snowy (Q) - For Approval
Hey there. I like this very much. / Changes here if needed 23:47, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source. Also, the shading on the belly and hind legs seems quite gray. <span style="">23:50 Thu Jul 3

Question: How do you define the light source? As for the shading, I'll have that up in a moment. 23:52, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups  23:54, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Defining the light source means to make the light face the same way everywhere on the cat. So let's say that your light source in in the top right corner. Everything in shadow would be everything from the bottom left corner. Idk I'm bad at explaining. As for the shading, It wasn't that gray. Now you need to define it. Sorry for the trouble! ^-^` <span style="">2:23 Fri Jul 4

Define the light on her foreleg farthest from us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:17, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups  15:22, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front two legs. Darkness-wise, I think they're pretty good, but they could use some slight definition. She's looking good, Rocket. Keep up the amazing work.

Re-Ups Thank you, Jayce :)  14:39, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
ew, I know. My first dapples, and I'm not entirely impressed. Changes be here 15:28, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 16:55, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes aren't showing yet 21:24, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

blur the dapples a bit. Also, possibly lighten them a tad to match the kit, apprentice, and warrior, that's up to you though. 23:28, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

I'm having a difficult time seeing the ear pink in --> ear. Mind shifting some shading around a bit so I can see it?

Reups changes 14:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Fallowfern (Q) - For Approval
Hey. 15:53, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and light on her legs. 15:54, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 16:04, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the belly shading, and darken it while you're at it.

IDK if it's necessary, but add some shading around her shoulder, too? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:29, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups. I'll add shading around the shoulder if someone else asks me to. It looks okay to me, but, then again, I'm a newbie 14:43, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, go ahead and do that. I think you'd need it with your source anyways.

Re-Ups I really hope it's shaped okay. This image is actually really, /really/ fun. 15:06, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Remove that bit of shading right by the chest since it doesn't belong there. And you might want to get a second opinion on this, but can you define the earpink a bit? Also blur the stomach shading a tad. 16:34, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. Ehhhhhhh... okay. The earpink is under the shading layers, I'll re-do it if someone else agrees, mainly because it took a few tries to get them right without seemind, well, neon-ish. also the shading is strange on her leg i know but that's the only way I could include the shoulder and not the chest. 17:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Star) - For Approval
Since the other one got declined, I figured I'd give this a go. The face shading is bugging me, but I can't figure out how to fix it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:33, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Try defining the facial shading to see if that helps. One way I've found is good is to bring the layers back down so it's just your linart, base color (no stripes if you can) and your shading. 15:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Rosetail (Star) ~ For Approval
Finally, she's confirmed! Comments? 15:56, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the earpink in this (--->) ear. Can you define it a bit? omg dem eyes tho O.O so pretty 17:28, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Rocket here. Also, could you blur the shading directly around the lower head/neck area?

re-up 17:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ For Approval
Here's the new version Whew, first charart in ages. It's probably for the best that I chose something simple since it's been awhile xD. Anyways, comments? 17:03, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading leaks away from the lineart on her belly 17:27, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I cleared all of the outside shading twice to make sure it was gone, so there shouldn't be any. 17:35, July 5, 2014 (UTC)