Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 113

One-eye (Q) - Approved
Comments? All colours are from her other images. 22:29, 05/23/2014

Could you lighten that shading just a bit? I know it's artist's choice, but it looks kinda dark... 22:52, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, there's a difference between artist's choice and the shading just being too dark for the pelt. I think in this case, it's too dark in general. Also blur the shading too.

Reups 12:57, 05/26/2014

Define the chest shading please. c: 14:03, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the light source? I don't really understand where the light is coming from. Those eyes owo

Reups the eyes are epic i love them i did a fantastic job~ 15:16, 05/26/2014

Maybe blur the shading a little more, and lighten it a couple percent on the opacity bar? Like, no more than maybe... 5%? Or at least for the tail/"back end" of the cat...everywhere else seems fine, but those areas are slightly darker.

Still working?

Reups Sorry about that ;-; 20:36, 06/2/2014

CBA? 20:48, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Approved.

Birch (Alt. Ki) - Approved
loo at this cutie patootie. Comments? 12:42, 05/26/2014

Lighten the brown a little bit? I almost thought it was black. 13:44, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:49, 05/26/2014

CBA? Very nice, dear. 19:52, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I really can't tell if the brown is brown or black, especially along the back/side lineart.

Is this still being worked on and did Ferk go poof?

I poofed because busy with life but I am back and will reup momentarily. 15:26, 06/1/2014

Reup 20:27, 06/2/2014

Let's try a CBA again. 20:48, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Approved.

Jaggedtooth (Lo) - Approved
Hello, I tried. All colors are the same. I'm actually really proud of this and it doesn't not match too terribly bad... keep in mind the loner blanks and the rogue/warriors are facing different directions. o3o

Define the shading on the edges of the front of the face. 22:16, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ah, trying to shade this is fun.

Define/add depth to the shading on the face/neck? I love this Skye *-* 21:25, 06/2/2014

I think it's fine. It's difficult enough to shade this pattern and it seems defined enough.

CBA? 20:47, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Approved.

Pinenose (Q) - Approved
20:31, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source on her back, legs, and tail. and add some depth to the eyes. Looks great :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:39, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

I think the eyes and back are fine but I did define the lightsource in the other areas. Thanks! c: 22:37, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading...and either it's just me, or she looks kinda cross-eyed.

Re-uploaded tried with the eyes 22:43, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading just a little bit more, especially on the belly.

Reuploaded. 18:00, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the face shading? Those eyes .o. 21:22, 06/2/2014

Re-uploaded 22:05, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 20:50, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Approved.