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Storm (Ro) (Ki) - Declined
This probably doesn't match well. 19:47, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, shading depth, and smooth the shading a bit.

Reuploaded 20:09, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It might just be me but she looks tinted yellow compared to the other images. 20:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

^^I see the yellow tint too.

Reuploaded I put a shading tint on the image. (if that's what you're talking about) Sorry, I should have said something about that. 21:14, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on her other images seem more... Clustered, for the lack of a better word. If you'd like, I can try and dig up the file for the ES. (Though my attempt at matching her pattern is pretty bad hh)

In between the thick tail stripes should be very thin, hardly noticeable stripes, i think.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better. :) And Fox, you don't have to dig the file out, you probably have so many other files and my computer doesn't load email anyway. 01:51, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the face and chest? Also, do you think you could curve the neck shading rather than having it be sort of a straight line, if that makes sense? 01:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

awww she's so cute (he?) ((: a suggestion is maybe u could extend the stripes to the empty area on the right hand side? cuz there should be stripes on her haunch area. 04:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Gah this is so hard to explain *.* but I feel like the stripes on her other images aren't as... Messy? Like they seem to form a more orderly pattern, if you get me. There also appears to be texture on her other images, so that also needs to be added.

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt. :) Hopefully this is close to what you meant, Fox. :D 00:35, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 23:36, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:45, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and smooth the bit of shading on the flank thing next to the -> arm

Reuploaded 21:55, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading between the front legs. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:59, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:27, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the <- arm and smooth it out a little?

Reuploaded  17:10, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more on the neck and face. 23:50, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:35, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes there 08:52, 7/30/2017

Reuploaded :) 20:16, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear to be a bit softer on the other images, also perhaps define the stripes under the shading? + smooth the shading on the ear

Reuploaded 18:17, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

doesnt she have a pale muzzle too? 21:16, 8/05/2017

Reuploaded It was already there but I defined it. :P 03:25, August 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the earpink a tad 21:09, 8/08/2017

Reuploaded 00:21, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading

Reuploaded Second time using layers! I messed around with some stuff and got this. They're magical. 17:00, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the head shading? 15:42, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:57, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

There appears to be waste above the tail, around the paws, and around the head and ears. I'd also suggest lightening the shading a bit and then adding (or darkening) the depth to make it more of a gradient

Define shading on tail. Smooth out shading everywhere, also. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:02, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the pattern underneath the shading 18:39, 8/16/2017

Still working, Shypaw?

Yes, I'm very sorry for my inactivity. I'll reupload later. 15:29, August 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:51, August 19, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. This looks good! :) 08:26, August 21, 2017 (UTC)

i still cannot see some of the pattern beneath the shading, namely on the --> side of the flank. maybe define the stripes, or lighten the shading a few ticks. 18:23, 8/23/2017

This has been over the one month limit? Has it? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 18:38, August 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, has by a few.^ Sorry, gotta decline this due to the one month limit.

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) - For Approval
Yes, I know the tail shading is horrible. I'll redo it later.

DOesn't she need texture, or does she not because she's a altErmineGlow (talk) 16:01, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

I think that since this is based off the manga, it shouldn't have texture. Although I'm not sure.

Can you recede the shading on the chest, then a little on the haunch? I just feel like it covers a bit too much with this source. I also think the shading needs to be smoothed out in order to add more depth :)

The farther front paw needs to be white, as shown in the manga. 16:38 Fri Aug 4

re-up Nope. Nope nope nope.

The shading it leaking a bit on the haunch and on the closest back leg. 17:48, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading to give it more of a gradient-style look. Unless you're going for a smudged look? Which in that case, you should probably have smudged all of the shading, not just the edges. It cuts off a bit too abruptly and then changes to an all block-y look.

Define shading depth? 23:25, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Uh, Skye I'm not quite following? Sorry if I sound like an idiot but I'm not understanding what you want me to do.

i think she wants you to smooth the shading Star 02:04, 8/05/2017

I know that, but I'm going for that smudged look, and smudged shading is really hard for me. Like what does it mean to smudge all the shading?

I'm sorry, that was phrased badly and I was tired as hell earlier. Smudging all the shading means not just the edges. With this image, there's the edges of the shading, and then where it abruptly changes to what seems to be a solid darker gray coloring. You see on this file of mine? Like how it's smudged throughout the entire shading layer, instead of just the edges? I mean try something like that.

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define the shading depth 17:33, 8/05/2017

also, define the earpink better 21:17, 8/05/2017

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Could you define the shading depth on the tail? 19:22, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe smudge the belly shading? Just that really dark bit near the front leg?

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maybe fix the tail shading, as it appears to be very blotchy <span style="">19:59, 8/07/2017

Okay but, the tail on this blank is so small and shading it right is difficult so imo it looks just fine but if someone else agrees with broken then ignore this lmao

I think the tail shading's all right, but the shading on the chest and haunch could be smoothed out a little more. 00:48, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

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Define shading on back legs. Also, maybe make the darker shade of the shading blend in more with the lighter shading. (If you know what I mean?) I see two different shades, or that could just be me, lol. Also smooth out the shading on the hind leg closest to us. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:55, August 11, 2017 (UTC)

re-up That's the shading depth, Cosmo. (smudged shading is difficult)

Could you smooth the shading on the haunch? Compared to the rest of the shading, it kind of cuts off abruptly rather than blending. 15:35, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

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The areas in red have shading leaking onto them, and I think the shading in green could be smoothed a bit more

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Can you smooth out the overall shading a little more? 20:55, August 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up this shading is killing me

Maybe add some shading on the head, in between the ears, it looks kinda flat there compared to the rest of the image. Good job on the shading btw! 19:19, August 18, 2017 (UTC)

re-up thanks!

CBA?

Sorry, but the shading can stand to be smoothed out (particularly on the neck)

I just wanted to say that the entire point of this shading is that it isn't smooth,, imo it looks okay.

Could you add a tiiiny bit more shading to the hindleg closest to us? :) 08:29, August 21, 2017 (UTC)

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I know the point of this shading style, but right now it looks somewhat... blotchy? (sorry if that's offensive) I'd say the shading on the main body is ok, but the shading on the neck is... inconsistent? (i can't find a better word)

re-up I cannot do smudged shading to save my life...

I feel like the shading where the should would be/upper back a ways below the neck is a bit sharp still

re-up may resort to blurring if this doesn't work

oh no, you absolutely don't need to bc this looks good. Anyways, I suggest the shading being lightened a couple of ticks and adding/defining shading on the closest back paw.

re-up thanks

Oatwhisker (WC) (Star) - For Approval
He looks so much better this time lol <span style="">16:12 Thu Aug 17

Can you define and/or darken the shading?

Reuploaded His pattern makes shading so irritating lol. It ends up too light or too dark. Although I'm very happy with the hand drawn shading. <span style="">16:31 Thu Aug 17

Idk honestly the drawn in toe lines are kinda unnecessary since theres already toe lines within the lineart. <span style="">19:25, 8/17/2017

there's no rule against it and it's not an actual lineart edit. 19:28, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

...There would be shading between the toes. They aren't flat 2 dimensial objects. Shading is supposed to highlight that point. I've done a lot of images like this and others do too... <span style="">19:55 Thu Aug 17

I didnt say remove them i just voiced my opinion is all. <span style="">20:19, 8/17/2017

The stripes seem more smudged out on the elder, this shading looks really detailed, nice job!

Many images have that style of shading, Winter. I've seen even a few just recently approved. It's a style of shading, and it's perfectly acceptable. I see no reason to say it's unnecessary, and some would even consider that offensive. (anyone remember the stink over smudging shading being "childish"? I sure do)

Is the nose filled in?

yep, it is. just with a very pale pink <span style="">04:02, 8/20/2017

can you define the shading a little bit more? I;m having trouble seeing it in some places. 20:03, August 20, 2017 (UTC)

define the eye depth in <--- eye <span style="">22:45, 8/20/2017

Still working?

Will upload in the morning. Gotta get some sleep for once. <span style="">02:31 Wed Aug 23

Reloaded So this is as much as I can define the shading and eye depth. The eye is a lot of pupil and I will not be reducing it, and the shading it as dark as it can go. It's not meant to have a ton of shading. <span style="">20:22 Wed Aug 23

Sasha (W) - For Approval
pls do not comment on the shading, I will fix it in a minute.

reups I've never been able to shade this blank I never will be. Also fun fact, I have 3 different shading layers, each with a different tint and source in case I decide I don't like whichever one I'm using. yikes @ me

I think the shading on the hindleg farthest from us should be swapped to the top, if I'm not mistaken... to follow the source. :) 08:29, August 21, 2017 (UTC)

Been wondering when someone was gonna add a cite for her being a warrior. I've been trying to get this to fly for years now. Blur the shading/smooth it out just a bit.

reups I thought there was already a cite for it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Smooth out the shading more.

reups i need to learn how to do sharp shading because my art program does not smooth well at all.

Possibly define tail shading? yes, shading warrior blanks are the literal worst but short-haired warriors are my worst nightmare

reups i wake up every morning screaming only to realize i was having a nightmare about short-haired warriors

Can you recede some of the brown from her ears? On her other images, the brown doesn't cover the entire ear. Pretty image! 12:34, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

reups thanks :^> I had the brown like that bc personally I think the other images should be tweaked considering shes described with brown ears, not ear-tips, and I was hoping I could get away with it :P

Thistleclaw (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
so he was described as only 'pale-furred' so i just made him a lighter-colored gray and white tabby. but since it was never specified, just tell me what i gotta do and ill remove what i have to hope i make sense lmao <span style="">01:27, 8/22/2017

re-uploaded. waste <span style="">01:35, 8/22/2017

Is his tail-tip cut off? Kinda looks like it to me.

it isnt, but i could narrow the lineart down to make it more clear <span style="">02:05, 8/22/2017

If you could, please? It really looks like it's cut off and had you not fixed it, I probably would have once it's approved.

Considering alts have been tweaked to remove stripes if they weren't specified with them, I don't think this should have stripes (Unless he was called a tabby or smth near the pale gray thing)

I agree with danny <span style="">02:26, 8/22/2017

Actually hold on, lemme contradict myself, I guess technically he wasn't called pale gray, he was just called pale-furred. So that could mean he's a pale tabby unless it specifies a certain color, maybe? I dunno.

I would take pale in this case to be pale of whatever he usually is, which in this case is a grey and white tabby. 02:44, August 22, 2017 (UTC)

so do i remove the stripes or...? <span style="">03:14, 8/22/2017

Nope, pretty sure you're all good.

re-uploaded. i told everyone i couldnt tabby for my life. <span style="">03:18, 8/22/2017

Barley (W) ~ For Approval
tbh if ravenpaw gets one for being called a warrior and then fighting alongside a clan so should barley and violet for when the same thing happened in a clan in need ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 06:52, August 23, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded pattern change 20:19, August 23, 2017 (UTC)

Violet (W) ~ For Approval
Pokemon collar, boom. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:10, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

best collar ever. smooth out the shading on the farthest back paw? (or smudge or whatever the heck you do with your shading, it's really pretty lmao)

holy sh*t pokeball collar :0 anyways, while you are at it, smooth out the shading on the furthest front paw too

smudge the cheek shading, also nice pokeball collar, my friend would likey this