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Patchpelt - Silver Nomination
Wow, there are a lot of good articles here :). Mentor, Apprentice, family and description are cited, and he has a lot of history. →  •Maple  fern•  ←  14:49, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I think his history could possibly be expanded.. esp Fire and Ice. If he is a minor character in the book then we need to jot down every appearance he has, however brief. ✐Sa NdY  15:00, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed, i think he had at least a few more appearances in the original series.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 15:08, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with sandy and insane. It could be expanded. Thats my only problem with the article. Otherwise, its good!Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 16:55, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone working on this?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I got Fire and Ice done. He's hardly ever seen in that book, he only has like two breif appearences Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:41, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good. Comments before his vote goes up?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Vote's up now.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost - Silver Nomination
He has a good sized article and (I believe) all of his cites and refs. His FE section in particular is quite good. Comments?-- Moonbeam SkyClan will rise! 15:53, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'llk have to check it out, but remember to check before nominating next time. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  22:30, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

A few of the sections could use a lot of expansion. I would go through all the books in general, though, just to make sure everything is documented. Skyfeather 16:09, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone still working on this? I might try to; I've been busy the past few days...  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 15:23, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Splashnose and Driftkit - Silver Nomination
Since they're all related, and all three of their pages look all snazzy and good, I'd like to nominate them. :) Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 01:27, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Its very good, but there's abrely enough to make a paragraph on Splashnose's page. :) Good idea though :) Fawnstorm  This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 14:51, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Fallowkit is actually Silver already but as for Driftkit and Splashnose, I think they could be a tad more detailed; since they're so minor, we should squeeze all we can out of their short appearance :)  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops, fail on my part. xD As for the other two, I'll re-read COTC tomorrow- it's getting rather late where I live. :) Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 00:59, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

More history could be added and they could be more detailed. Ice Spring is here! 01:05, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Okies, I'm on that now. ^_^ Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 12:55, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I still think at least a teeny bit more could be added to both, especially Driftkit; Considering the fact that he was the main focus of that story, but Fallowkit has a longer history, that doesn't make sense. I understand that it might not be possible to get more for Splashnose but for Driftkit at least, it should be expanded.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist - Silver Nomination
I looked her over, added more history and fixed a couple of things, and she looks fine to me. Comments? Ice Spring is here! 01:17, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, but her apperances in Dark River could be expanded. Its very good though for a minor character. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:33, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I filled out her history for everything except OTS series - someone else will need to check over that - and filled in the missing citations. ✐Sa NdY  15:53, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good, any concerns before her vote?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I ran into a slight problem trying to fix her family tree. I edited the template, and added references and citations. And when I went to Graymist's article, those references were on her page. Could anyone help me fix it?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:41, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I found the problem, you had an extra before the references section, so it thought you wanted it included :P It should be fixed now, so I put up her vote.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Foxleap-Silver Nomination
His article is a good size. I haven't read FE so I don't know what happens. I was wondering if someone could sort that out? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  11:50, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Haha, I haven't even read Long Shadows yet, but think that's actually all of his appearances. Not sure though. x3

I'll look for the "Foxcatcher" quote in Eclipse and a few others if you'd like, but the article looks pretty good in my opinion. ^_^ Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 11:54, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

hmm... I filled out the history; there were a fair few things that could be expanded to make his article fuller - and added a coule of quotes. There were also some citations missing... I got all of them except one for him having green eyes - if anyone else can find it, that would be good. ✐Sa NdY  15:29, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Forgot to mention... I didn't do TFA or FE sections so perhaps someone else can have a look over them? ✐Sa NdY  15:37, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think some of the sections could be expanded just a bit more. He and Icecloud are very similiar, and I was able to add a lot to her article. Skyfeather 20:47, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I finished off TFA and FE now my books finally arrived and removed the green eyes from his description as I couldn't find a citation anywhere. ✐Sa NdY  16:42, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

He looks great, any comments before I put up the vote?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Vote is up now.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Scourge - Gold Nomination
Okay, I'm UBER sorry If I'm not allowed to nominate gold, but I have looked over Scourge's page many times, added references to nearly everything (Past names, Past Clans, Descriptions... etc), added quotes, and yeah.

And it's been featured on the front page, which I know is a requirement. ^_^

So... is Scourge ready for gold or am I just being an epic fail by bringing this up? ^^ Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 12:54, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Cite the purple collar. → •Maple  fern•  ←  10:51, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

That would be Revealed on the cover of The Rise of Scourge, right? Cuz I'm dumb and half-asleep at the moment. =P Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 12:54, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Correct. → •Maple  fern•  ←  12:55, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Is there any page (probably in The Darkest Hour) that lists all or at least more than one of his appearance traits? It just looks a bit messy to have a citation every two words in his description and if we could find one that covered most of it it would look better, not to mention be easier to deal with...  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 15:36, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

The Darkest Hour, Pages 4 and 5 have most of the info... should I just put one ref at the end saying, Revealed in Pages 4-5 of The Darkest Hour? Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 15:43, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

If those have all of them, then great. It's okay if there's another one or maybe two that really weren't revealed in TDH, they can have their own citations, I just wanted to cut down on the number as much as we can.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 15:44, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Is that better? =P Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 15:47, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I see the citations are perfect, I've researched, the descriptions are beautiful. I think he's ready. LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:27, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

One more thing...Where was it mentioned that he had claws renforced with dogs' teeth? → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:54, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mmm... I've been looking for that, but I can't find anything. D=  Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 00:55, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

The Darkest Hour, I'm sure... I'll have a look later when I've actually got dressed ^_^ ✐Sa  NdY  07:03, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

It was Darkest Hour. It says somewhere where we first see Scourge. Quailflight 10:05, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! I found it; page 233 of The Darkest Hour. (The pale leaf-bare sun glinted unnaturally on the tips of each talon. Firestar felt his blood run cold. Scourge's claws were reinforced with long, sharpened dogs' teeth.)  Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 13:12, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Now he's ready. I really want to see him gold now. Quailflight 15:08, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's ready too. He's got a good amount of history for the comparatively small amount of appearances he's made, and all his citations check out, and he's got quotes too. I don't see anything stopping him now.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Runningnose - Silver Nomination
I went over his history and ciations. I think he ready for silver. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 22:03, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's ready. The only thing that I can see is that some of his citations are missing. But I'll go ahead and get those. =) -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 01:51, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

He's pretty good, but if at all possible his history should be expanded for a few of the books, particularly the ones that only have one line (excepting of course when he only appears in the allegiances). But if nothing more can be written at all for those books, just tell me and I think he's good.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Mist and Star - References?
I noticed that both Mist and Star are lacking references- I've checked Moonrise, and there's nothing on their descriptions. Does anyone know the pages where their descriptions may be mentioned? D= Vaan "So, Fran... how old are you?" 22:29, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... Did you check any of the other books (That had the Tribe in them)? Im not quiet sure myself, really. Fail on my part. 火の毛皮 23:23, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone looking for these? It would be a shame if they had been false all along...  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Redscar -- Silver Nomination
I think Redscar's article looks good. Comments? → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think he needs a pelt colour ciation. Somebody check in COTC? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 00:54, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

He has one. → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:55, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

He looks fine; comments before his vote?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Vote's up now.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar - Silver Nomination
Ah, an evil character. :3 He looks good to me. But, I'm blind and who knows, I could have missed something! xD -- Ice The stars will light your path... 00:58, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Err, are you sure you meant this for gold? He's not even silver yet and he hasn't been featured...  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 11:34, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

oh, sorry. I meant silver. Stupid me! *bangs head against a wall* -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:48, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

He's great, except his Fading Echoes section definitely needs expansion.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Done. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:11, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Birchstar (SC) -- Silver nomiantion
I think she is ready. → •Maple  fern•  ←  18:15, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I agree-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   18:40, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 01:23, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Double Ditto. Quailflight 10:08, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Triple Ditto XDS N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 01:49, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, she looks good, comments before the vote?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Vote's up now.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Minty - Silver Nomination
I added citations and checked through the book for all the information. It looks ready to me-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:40, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I haven't read the Ravenpaw's path series so I can't accurately check the history, but I trust that you've gotten it. I don't see any other issues.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Specklepaw - Silver Nomination
My first nomination! He looks good to me.S N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 01:47, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

His citations are in order, and I cleaned up his history a bit. There's not much I think we could add to his article, but it seems so small. He says nothing quote worthy in Code of the Clans, so I didn't add any quotes. However, I don't see why he couldn't be silver. Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 04:07, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Same as what Nightfall said. Comments before the vote?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:33, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderpelt - Silver Nomination
(First Nom.) After the content drive, she looks pretty good. (This is Quailflight, having technical difficulties.)

As the person who did most of her history check over during the Content Drive, she needs more detail in her NP sections. I'll try and get to it if I can seeing as I've been meaning to for a while.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 13:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Halftail - Silver Nomination
I filled out his history, and checked his ciations. I know he needs family ciations, and I'll fill them over later. Comments? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:41, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Needs a citation for Snowfur as his apprentice. → •Maple  fern•  ←  17:44, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Got it :) Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:25, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I also cleaned up his history a bit Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:34, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I did some more editing. It looks OK to me. Helixtalk 20:30, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Only thing that I see is that citation #5 goes page.... no number. Can we put a page number on this? LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:30, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

It is done :)

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 19:40, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Now "prophecy" is spelled wrong! Quailflight 07:52, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed that. ✐Sa NdY  13:25, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) - Silver Nomination
I cited his family, description, and mentor, and filled in as much history as I could for him. (In Moonrise, he really doesn't appear any more than that). The only thing I couldn't check is his Dawn section because my copy is missing, so maybe someone should check that over for detail, but other than that I think he's good.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 15:47, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Let me grab my Dawn book and check it out. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   01:06, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like his Dawn section has been filled in, so any concerns with him other than that?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Speckletail - Silver Nomination
I think she is ready for silver. From the last time I nominated her, and she was not quiet ready, her artical has been worked on, history added, ect. Is she good enough? 火の毛皮 "Life, is but a walking shadow." 21:28, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm still working on adding all the info from the books. I'm only on Forest of Secrets so far. I was going to nominate her once I was done.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:17, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Mossfire -- Silver Nomination
Not much to say about it. Comments? → •Maple  fern•  ←  13:39, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Looks okay to me. Anyone see anything wrong?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:30, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Featured Article - May '10
Ack, I'm sorry we're cutting it so close this month, it's my fault for losing track of time because of vacation! Depending on how quickly we come to an agreement we might have to shorten the vote time, just this once, since the vote is supposed to be a week, but... mea culpa. Anyways. Who do you guys want to feature? I think it'd be cool to have a character that has a lot to do with OTS, such as a Dark Forest cat or something, as Fading Echoes is still somewhat recent... The only thing is not a lot of characters that fit that bill are already silver. An article doesn't have to be silver to be featured but it's not always the best to showcase an article that hasn't yet been checked for quality XD; anyways. Who would you guys like? Let's try and decide quickly due to my fail timekeeping :P  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:34, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Has Hawkfrost been featured already? Cool Blue Reason: Wrapped Around Your Throat  01:38, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I was wanting to do him, but he could use a bit of a cleanup. However, if people like him we can feature him anyways, as he'll probably be cleaned up soon given that his nomination's pending right now. I also noticed Breezepelt, who is already silver and is pretty important in OTS. Just another one to consider :P  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 01:40, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I was just about to say that! I hate editing conflicts.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:41, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

LOL me too. Anyway, I think that Breezepelt would be good. <font color="#99badd">Cool Blue Reason: <font color="#191970">Wrapped Around Your Throat  01:41, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

We could also fix up Brokenstar or Hawkfrost-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:44, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I like the idea of Breezepelt. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   15:18, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think Breezepelt or Jayfeather might be good. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)