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Snowstar (Le) ~ For Approval
here is a son, I tried to match the StarClan as best as I could 03:25, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

define shading on the face? 12:15, 3/14/2019

Think there's some leaking shading on the front limbs and belly shading. 18:32, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the StarClan image is a tad bit lighter than what you have here. Not a lot, but maybe a couple of shades. ​​

I colored picked from the star, although it was hars with the highlights and shading covering most of it. I'll try and it some though. 21:29, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe try using highlights to match the image in brightness, it might help a little? 23:33 Thu Mar 14 2019

is it just me, or dose it look like the earpink is on the ear, out of where the earpink should be? Axolotls are my children!  01:33, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Earpink is fine. --

08:36, 3/15/2019

The circle created by the tail should not be filled in. 18:38, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

it does look like there is a tiny bit of earpink waste on our left side's cheek above the eye. 19:03 Fri Mar 15

That's shading, I used red. Its the same as my other leader images. 20:39, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna be the unpopular one here, but the tint really throws the color off and makes it seem like it doesn't match the StarClan image. Also, not sure what you do or don't plan on doing, but Max's suggestion of using highlights might work out for matching the color better. ​​​​​

Re-Ups, let me know if the changes don't show but they seem to be showing. I added highlights, a bit more shading to the face, and smoothed the shading a lot. I also got rid of that tail waste. 09:26, March 18, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the ears? 12:50, March 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's not really any shading on the left one and the right one is in the shadow. Could I get a second? I can try and define it. 01:04, March 20, 2019 (UTC)

I think the depth could be defined. It all being in shadow doesn't mean there wouldn't be some depth to it. Plus, ears aren't flat objects; there'd be at least some depth in <- ear anyways due to it being a 3D object. ​​

I'd suggest adding some highlights onto the face, and possible the other shoulder a little as well. That'll help pull more contrast and make your shadows a little stronger too 05:21 Sat Mar 23 2019

Remove a touch of the shading on the < side of the tail (where it bends). The light's coming in like > that everywhere else and thus wouldn't be in shadow

still working? 13:07, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, will upload tomorrow. I've been sick. 18:01, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups 23:52, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

You mind cropping the image to the lineart? There's way too much extra space on <- side.

Ginger-and-white kittypet ~ CBA
First charart...! I hope I did this right... -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  02:39, March 21, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb, it messes up the page. It's the '|left'. This is very good! Could you define the shading a bit? Just a smidge. Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 03:01, March 21, 2019 (UTC)

This looks great! I'm gonna bump ya up to an apprentice since you clear know what you're doing ;) 12:41, March 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ah thank you!! -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  17:10, March 21, 2019 (UTC)

this is so cute!! could you smooth out the shading on the back haunch some? 21:26 Fri Mar 22

Reuploaded! -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  21:40, March 22, 2019 (UTC)

where is your light source coming from?

The southwest area, around the tail ^^ -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  04:07, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

If that is the case, perhaps switch the front leg's shading or recede it?

Reuploaded! -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  15:31, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Nice image^^ Add a touch of shading on the topside/ > side of the tail; even given the light source, the haunch would put part of that in shading; and it'd also help it not look flat

Reuploaded! -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  22:10, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

This is honestly gorgeous. CBA? 16:20, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets tabby (Q) ~ For Approval
yes, I know there's waste. I'll fix these stripes on the belly tomorrow. 06:41, March 21, 2019 (UTC)

Pretty! I think there's shading leaking in ---> ear, and could you smooth the shading slightly at the base of the tail? 12:36, March 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly add a dorsal stripe or something along those lines? I've seen images with similar patterns to this be considered more of a triangle tabby/unnatural pattern and then redone. ​

Still working?

Yeah, will upload sometime today or tomorrow. 11:45, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Rise of Scourge Kittypet (KP) - CBA
17:27, March 21, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the belly/haunch/front leg shading a bit? ​​​​

Re-uploaded 06:20, March 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Shouldn't the texture be removed, since this is from a manga? 00:20, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, it should. Others have been made to remove the texture in the past, and Burnt was just asked to remove the texture on hers. ​

Re-uploaded 05:40, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-cBA?

White striped rogue (Ro) ~ For Approval
Alright, assuming I found the right cat, I think I did this pattern right, though the pattern changes with each square, so... corrections would be greatly appreciated. Also, the file name is Rogue One :P  '' Warriorcat1195   When Gravity Falls and Earth become sky, fear the beast with just one eye. ''  .    . ​

could you smooth out the shading on the back-back leg? (idk if that makes sense) 09:22, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light at the base of the tail a bit more? 18:39, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading on the neck a little? 20:35 Sat Mar 23

Reuploaded I just saw the two latest comments now so I'll fix it next time 20:41, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, don't believe there'd be any shading on the back; it'd be expanded on the belly and upwards to form the haunch and back of the shoulder. There'd also be a touch on the base of the chest; and a bit more light on the topside of the < side of the tail

Can you smooth out the shading in the belly area a bit? 23:43, March 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading maybe this works now 00:00, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and ears. 19:53, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Tortie and white rogue ~ for approval
ew how did i regress so much in one day sksks 12:53, March 24, 2019 (UTC)

Would you be able to define the shading any? The pattern placement here is making seeing the shading extremely difficult.

Stone Song (PoT) (L) - For Approval
Don't know about these stripes. I know they don't match as well, don't comment on that I'm going to fix it. 00:18 Mon Mar 25

Could you expand that left earpink down? It looks odd and it seems lije it cuts off half way 11:47, March 25, 2019 (UTC)