Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 108

Plumwillow (Alt KP) ~ Approved
First shot at texture (I fail). Her trivia states that she is shown as pale gray in the SATS mangas, and she was given a kittypet for being fed by the twoleg, so I think that means she was shown as pale gray there. 18:56, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Pretty! you didn't fail. Define the ear pink on this >>>> ear.

Which one? If you mean the one on our right, no. Not all kp images need it in that ear as  it could be facing away or toward us, I believe. 19:50, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, okay, I didn't know. Anyway, isn't she supposed to be a shorthair? Sorry if she isn't.

Her alt warrior is long haired, so it's fine. 19:58, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Erm, if the warrior image doesn't have texture, doesn't that mean this wouldn't have it either? 20:11, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Alts don't have to match. This has been brought up many times. 20:17, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 20:21, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Reups  21:09, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

In this case, they do have to match, Sorrel. They are for the same arc of books that this image is for, since they are the exact same time period. If you want, I can give you the colors for the alt warrior, since they really should match in this circumstance. We have a picture, and an already existing alt for the same exact arc.

Ah, I see. Sorry. Would you mind giving me the colours, then? 22:13, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Yup! Just let me re-install GIMP and I can do some converting and stuff. My laptop's a butt as of late. x.x

Maybe blur the shading along the back a little? 00:14, September 20, 2013 (UTC)  Shadewing

Well, since GIMP keeps crashing, what I did was zoomed in on the image while it was unshaded, so you could see the colors from this screencap. It's about the best I can do right now util GIMP loads long enough for me to convert the file.

I can get the colors, Cloudy, since my GIMP works fine. 15:26, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

Actually, Rave, I've got the colours now. I colour picked. 15:30, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

Okay that's cool. :D I did that too. Mine came out about a #d8dad7. You probably got the same. :3  15:32, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reups yup. c: 15:54, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading a little? 20:24 Sat Sep 21

I don't mean to sound offensive if I do, but the light source doesn't really make sense... It seems as if you just shaded on the outside of the charart, and left it unshaded in the middle... I'm really sorry if this comes off as rude, Sorrel, but I have no other way of explaining it. x.x Anyways I suck at white and pale gray cats.

I think the light source is fine. I do this on my kittypets. But, I think the shading up here ^ on the body, should be moved up more to the neck, so it makes a little more sense. It looks amazing! c: Also, I added you to my friend list, Sorrel, since you're awesome. c: 00:07, September 22, 2013 (UTC)

No, I agree with Stoney. This is an amazing image, Sorrel! 00:14, September 22, 2013 (UTC)

Smooth out the lines where the collar was, it still kinda looks like a collar is there. 03:54 Sun Sep 22

Reups thank you, Hawk and Rave! x3 And it didn't sound rude, Stoney. And I'm sure you don't suck at white and pale grays c:  15:28, September 22, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the shading between the foreleg and the haunch? (The belly) 20:45, September 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 12:19, September 25, 2013 (UTC)

Looks pretty<3 Blur the shading a bit, however, if you don't mind. :3

Her neck is a little too thick, I think. Perhaps use the lineart for Honeypaw and see how it looks? I tried the same thing back when I made that image and got told it was too thick.

Reups how's this? And danke, Stoney. 21:29, September 26, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe add another pixel or two so it doesn't look so straight? Other than that, it's pretty good how you have it.

Lovely! Maybe blur the shading along the back and tail a bit? 00:48, September 27, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Reups; I decided to redo the shading. I finally got it decent... 19:03, September 27, 2013 (UTC)

-prods for comments- 20:48, September 29, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs.

Reups 18:18, September 30, 2013 (UTC)

Define the lightsource, and eyedepth. Also, the shading looks a bit blotchy. 20:40, September 30, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 16:42, October 1, 2013 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is leaking out of the ear, but other than that, this is brilliant!  Living the dream...

Nope, it's not. And thank you! 17:24, October 1, 2013 (UTC)

I think this is great ^^ CBA? 00:50, October 2, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.