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Boulder (Alt W) - For Evaluation
Comments? I can't do shading, so can any warrior help? Also, BG Color? Tigertastrophe (talk) 17:58, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Size the image down, please. The heading needs to be Boulder (Alt W)- For Evaluation, since you are a kit. 18:01, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

This also needs to match his other alts in the set, since this is from TUG. What program do you use? To make the background transparent, find the magic wand tool, select outside of the lineart, and hit delete. To add shading, pick a color and paint it on, set it to multiply (if you aren't using layers, please use them, they are useful) and lower the opacity. Then blur/smudge with the tools to make it a gradient. 18:09, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

I use the Paint Program on Windows. It doesn't have layer options. Tigertastrophe (talk) 21:05, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

You should use a program that allows you to use layers, such as GIMP (which is free), Photoshop, and Pixlr (also free). 21:41, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

When you do get layers, add shading and blur the colors a little.

00:52, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

I already tried downloading GIMP, but apparently my PC doesn't have enough space, even though I've deleted alot of files.. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:17, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Oo, wait hold up. Pixlr editor works, alrighty gimme a few days and I'll fix this warrior up. It may be late since I have exams, but I'll try otherwise. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:20, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Where do I place the shading? I checked apprentice tutorials, and it's not there. Tigertastrophe (talk) 16:09, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

here you go! 16:28, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, the Tutorials don't show how to shade the new warrior blank, just the old one. Here and here  are some examples. 22:45, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, Greenflower. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:14, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

finished and re uploaded. Couldn't find the delete for bg. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:05, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Rename this to File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png. You need to use the lineart of the shorthair warrior blank. 00:33, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Pixlr should have the magic wand tool. You need to select outside of the lineart, and press delete. Don't get me? See the Tutorials, I think they have a tutorial on making the background transparent. 00:39, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh forgot we got new blanks. I apologize for that. Also, I renamed it for you. Please continue to reupload over File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png. And would you like one of the files? I have the elder and rogue files if you wanna match the colors from them. Speaking of which, there shouldn't be any stripes on the chest and paler parts around his muzzle and eyes. 03:15, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, Vector! Any of them would be fine tbh. And I'll be sure to check AP. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:14, May 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reup. Maybe I just shouldn't be making charart, I'm still a newbie to all this stuff.. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:07, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

This should be uploaded under File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png not what yoy uploaded it as you have to keep replacing the previous version.  Ellie  life is an illusion 00:23, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Make the background transparent, and the stripes are a gray-green color on his other alts. If you need help with the background, just ask. 01:08, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge everything. And don't thumb your images! 01:59, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

the earpink looks blurry and out of place

14:24, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

the shading source seems to be contradictory, as there is shading on <-- side (his back) but also on --> side (front of his chest)

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Cherrypaw (OT) (Ki) - For Approval
I tried 19:24 Tue May 21

Can you define the light on the --> ear  Ellie  life is an illusion 21:19, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Really nice! Can you define the shading on the head (where it touches the shoulder/neck) and perhaps on the foreleg? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:00, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the face in general?

I'll get to this ASAP. I have two papers due on Sunday that I put off cause I was waiting for feedback on what I have so far. 23:54 Fri May 24

Bird That Rides the Wind (E) - For Approval
All colors from the loner file. I'll rough up the stripes in a bit. 19:26 Tue May 21

Can you define the facial shading just a bit?  Ellie  life is an illusion 21:20, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

See Cherrypaw. 23:54 Fri May 24

Boulder (E) ~ CBA
Dunno how I feel about the texture. Also the torn ear is different on each image lmao. 04:29, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shoulder shading a touch?

Reups 19:37, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:20, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) (E) ~ CBA
ehh

Why does he have stripes? Is that texture? 13:01, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

um he's literally said to be a tabby? and i matched the apprentice

This one has stripes, Potato. It's the WindClan Rushtail that doesn't. ​

Lol sorry, read too fast  18:33, May 23, 2019 (UTC)​

CBA? 15:18, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Longtail (E) - For Approval
forgot the scar, sorry will reup 05:09, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

I thought the discussion on matching lineart was basically that important features should all have matching lineart? Is it possible that you could match the lineart from his brown elder image? I also think you forgot the torn ear. ​​​

oh yeah, i tried but i literally cant download the image for some reason (idk if anyone else is having this problem but whenever i download an image from wiki its a corrupt file), so i did my best but really idk what to do unless someone sends me the linear art in pc 05:37, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

reup will remove waste next 09:54, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

I might have the loneart for this, I'd have to check hut if I do I can send it through.  Ellie  life is an illusion 13:05, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Might just be my screen, but there appears to be a lil gray above his left torn ear. You remember the past  at the expense of the future.  01:46, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

reup i said i would remove the waste... 08:15, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you adding shading depth, it all looks flat. Maybe some more light on the haunch <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:24, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Burnt's shading never looks flat, and this isn't an exception. Also, have you gotten the lineart yet? If not, I can give it a shot and see what I get. ​

I haven't been on my laptop yet, it's charging currently but I'll be hopping on after this movie I'm watching and will see. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:44, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

i havent, jayce ^^ 01:20, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (Queen) - For Approval
Time to slink back into cat art hell now I've fixed my programs :) <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 15:58, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lessen the belly shading some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:25, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I don't really like to just say it's fine much when possible but I feel like the belly shading is ok, my minor character queen has roughly the same amount. I'll do it no problem though if someone else agrees with you, Mink. ;; <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:07, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

meh it looks fine to me, sorry mink.

18:18, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Starlingfeather (Elder) - For Approval
o- owo?? 22:20, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

O-OWO??? this is super cute!! maybe darken the texture a little more? 23:55, May 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The texture is rougher and the base is darker on the StarClan. 00:31, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light source? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:26, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like it's coming from the top at a diagonal angle. 17:28, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I see some where its coming from, I'm asking them to define it more. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:55, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 13:58, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more light to the ---> ear and the tail? This is very pretty :) 18:30, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks! Re-Uploaded! 14:11, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Zack (K) ~ For Approval
winging it i guess (adding collar next reup)

08:29, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly curve that shoulder shading upwards to match the shape of his shoulder? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:10, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

reups got the collar on

14:22, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you curve the shoulder shading a tad more to the right? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:23, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

reups

15:29, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shoulder shading and the haunch shading (the part next to the tail). Also I think gray from the tail is leaking onto the hind leg farthest from us. :) - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:50, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Dark-colored and white rogue (Ro) ~ CBA
i have no idea what to name this lol

i think the belly shading should be on the top by the light source

14:20, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the overall shading? Also, I'm not 100% what the naming is myself, but we can take care of that after everything is said and done. No need to worry about it now, since it's not really super important. ​

reups if the patch on the back looks darker, it's probably because it's all in shading but all the patches have the same base colour

CBA? 13:21, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Antfur (W) ~ For Approval
19:38, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Might be the way this blank is posed, but I think his cheek scars should be there.

02:49, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps the very end of the longest scar can show but that might be a stretch. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:53, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reups The scars were there, just hidden by the shading. I made them a little more visible. 18:26, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Brown tabby (KP) - CBA
Not sure if it's named correctly, but that can be taken care of when everything else is said and done. I miiiight have gone a little overboard with the smudging, and I do not care. I like this. ​

This is so freaking cute omg!!! Could you define the facial shading a tad? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:17, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tweaked a couple other things that were bugging me. ​

CBA? 13:20, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Dark-colored kit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I'll define the paler muzzle soonish, I can see that its hard to see <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:59, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Doesn't this have to be in grayscale since this is from a manga? 02:31, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

From what the section told it wasn't a manga one? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:05, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

I see it now, I'll fix it on my next upload. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:09, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:29, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Needletail (Alt. W) - Declined
03:30, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

what alt is this?

probably the shattered sky cover alt?

05:14, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think it's the alt where she's shown without her white chest fur. I don't know if that's counted as enough of an error to warrant the alt, though. ​​

I think it does warrant an alt, considering her white chest fur is a main part of her design, at least imo. Anyways this is really nice! Since it's based off the design of her on Shattered Sky I feel like it should be lighter though. I know shes in the sunlight but she could be a tad paler I think. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:48, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the main issue is you can't even see the chest well due to the lighting. There's no way to tell with certainty if that's actually not white.

If this is on the official art I think it is, I can definitely see white on the chest. So I don't think an alt is needed. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:18, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

^and unlike cinderheart's alt, i dont believe this was voted for or anything? i could be wrong though. 16:23, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

No, I haven't seen any new arc alts being voted on iirc <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:31, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

I don't see white chest fur on the official art, only a white muzzle and white around the eyes. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:46, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this alt was never voted on, so I'm inclined to decline this. However, anyone is free to make their case at the official art alternate images vote. 18:25, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Made my case, feel free to vote for or against. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:04, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Gray and white warrior ~ For Approval
it's texture not stripes

I know you said it isn’t stripes, but, on the body they look like stripes in my opinion. It might just be because they are going horizontally, so maybe changing the direction might help?

Re-uploaded

Dawnflower (Ki) ~ For Approval
the official tree cite gave her parents so I believe this would be okay to post now <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:29, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think you’ve got two original images up Mink, so I believe you have to pick between this and the Dark coloured kit

Oof, I forgot about that. I'll drop this one then. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:57, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

I'll take over. 13:36, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded here is my version! Comments? 15:00, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Onestar (Warrior Alt) - For Evaluation
Im not very sure if this can be made but I saw it under the characters that need art. I tried to make it as similar as possible.

Sorry if I did make a mistake of making this, im very new to the project so here it is... Kezii (talk) 01:43, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

By the way I also used FireAlpaca if there needs to be changes. Kezii (talk) 01:45, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Welcome to the project! You are able to make this i believe, but since this is your first Chaart, this is for Evaluation I'm pretty sure, Don't thumb your images or align them (|thumb) (|left or |right), Put the image before any flavor text you wanna put along with it! This should be named File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png aswell. The < eye is looking a bit gray, and shading could be defined. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:03, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I have the leader file from when I was doing this, I can email if you want? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:56, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink. 13:37, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Light brown warrior with a snaggle tooth (WC) - For Approval
actually kinda happy with this - love the eyes tbh

wow i love this define the light on the tail?

Orange and gray cat (W) - For Approval
failed to match my own pattern, rip 10:23, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

define shading depth

Can you make the gray look more gray? It looks brown to me. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  13:33, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

looks like a brown-gray to me.

Yeah never mind, it looks gray on my computer but brown on my phone. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:18, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I think it could be made more gray, it looks dusky brown to me <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:42, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Mink. 17:53, May 26, 2019 (UTC)