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Mudfur (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. -- 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad?

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry 01:34, 8/30/2019

Still working? 14:39, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They lost their drawing pen. I believe it is Vec who gave them an extension Moo (talk) 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, sorry for the long wait, like Moo said I lost my pen and Vec (may have been Jayce I can't remember) gave me an extension. I didn't want to put it off any longer so I did it with a keyboard. Anyway, I did all the suggestions (or most) that you guys said, what do you think?

Looking good Firespring! Hmm, curve the shading on the haunch more (let me know if you need a redline) and there's waste outside the tail. The coloring on the nosepink and mottles are still a little off (nose should be #1b1411, the mottles should be #493522). -- 23:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now?

You're getting there! I think the shading could be smoothed a bit, and the mottles look sharper on the alt star (try running a low opacity sharpen tool or a low sharpen filter on the mottles, beware of color pixels). You could also use a low opacity pencil and draw over the mottles, which will make them sharper as well. -- 00:12, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the <-- ear. 00:23, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? Also, there already is shading on the ear. 00:28, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Is it me, or am I seeing texture on the image? If it's texture, it needs to be removed as the alt star doesn't have any. -- 00:31, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Removed texture. 00:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading on --> that ear but not on <-- this ear. 01:04, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added shading to left ear. 05:34, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a some more on the body

Featherpelt (K) - For Approval
Let's give a tabby a shot rip Moo (talk) 02:32, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define/expand the shading and smudge the stripes more. -- 02:33, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:43, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

the shading on her face seems a lil flat. 05:09, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I have no idea how to fix flat shading but I tried and also fixed some leaking Moo (talk) 08:44, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

A kinda easy way is to add another layer of shading that covers only a small area of the first layer of shading to create a sense of depth (kinda like on Doestar's kit)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 07:13, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the stripe on the very tail tip; just seems thicker than the other images. The stripes on the haunch also seem a touch to sharp; looks great though

reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:03, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:04, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I'm REALLY sorry to break a CBA, but could you smooth the face shading a bit more? :( 01:06, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded rip its ok milk Moo (talk) 04:35, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sasha (W) - For Approval
i hate this. it's horrible as heck. 05:42, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you remove the shading over the eyes, Smudge the tail a bit more smoothly, and lighten the shading? Thanks! Moo (talk) 08:35, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it, too. -- 15:08, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:40, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the shading depth on the front legs, and smooth the shading more. -- 17:46, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:57, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading, and erase it on the eye. -- 18:59, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

And can you smudge the earpink and brown a bit more? Moo (talk) 21:20, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. gimme a sec, and the eye shading will be gone. 06:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

'''look at them eyes. reuploaded. 06:27, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading more --Moo (talk) 04:23, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:31, September 3, 2019 (UTC)'''

The base colour looks too "cool" compared to her other images; maybe try #C59A70 for the base? Or even giving the shading a red tint, though that is completely artist's choice

'''reuploaded. tell me if should change the shading tint. 00:14, September 4, 2019 (UTC)'''

The brown and earpink appear too dark compared with her other images. 14:41, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the haunch shading a touch; just so it curves a little more to the shape of the haunch since rn it just covers most of it

'''reuploaded. 00:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Try #5F4331 for the brown ears and tail

'''reuploaded. 01:54, September 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

It might be wikia just being a butt; but i'm not really seeing any changes? The brown still looks too dark

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. -- 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 16:48, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a tiny bit on the tail, plus I think it could be smoothed some. -- 23:07, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sasha (K) - For Approval
My favorite part about this one: Making the collar. -- 23:16, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Both ears are supposed to be brown, I think. 00:35, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

I believe this only affects the outer part of the ear, not the inner? Just in case, could I get a second opinion on that? -- 00:37, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

eh I think the inner ear would matter too

I also think the collar tag would be on the other side; right now it looks like it's not abiding by the laws of gravity. Or it's stuck upright or something. 15:34, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:16, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

The brown tail/ears in her other images look lighter + warmer than the colour you've got here

Reuploaded -- 22:34, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Try #5F4331 for the brown ears and tail

Reuploaded That's much better, thanks Max! -- 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Softpelt (K) - For Approval
Here I think the shading needs smoothing but I wanna get this in quickly so I remember Moo (talk) 05:47, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 06:10, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit too, while you're at it. ​​​​

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:25, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading more, I'd use a #737373 color tint. 04:46, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

If you need the files from the other images, feel free to let me know, I've got the app and warrior. It is a solid though, so you could do well without it either way

Ok thank you Spooky Moo (talk) 23:52, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 00:10, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. -- 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 00:15, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

a wee bit more? 00:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded No more. I think it might even be too dark right now Moo (talk) 04:04, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to differ, but I do feel it does need to be darkened still, because it lacks depth; checked on two screens. The file revisions here don't show it darkening very much between uploads, and it definitely isn't too dark.

Thats weird it's super dark for me. but i can? Moo (talk) 23:30, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Spooky that you should darken it and define the shading depth a bit more. -- 23:31, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:52, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

lessen some of the shading from the face just a tiny bit as it looks too dark compared to the rest of the body

Creek (ki) - CBA
21:40, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

I didn't realize he was a kit, will fix that later. 21:49, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:58, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Squirrelflight (K) - CBA


Cute. CBA? 15:03, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Stormfur (W) - CBA


Could you lighten the shading just barely? Just the smallest smidge; it looks black where it is rn, so just to the point where it isn't almost bicolor if you get what I mean

reuploaded

CBA? 15:04, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Snowbird (W) ~ For Approval
I tried a new light source so go on easy on me lol

17:40, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Some shading leaking along the chest and add some more shading to the > forleg. 18:21, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

19:14, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Make the nose pink to match the rogue and smoothen out the shading on the back leg. 19:54, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

20:51, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

expand the haunch shading. 00:57, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and it's also leaking in several places on the tail. -- 01:00, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

01:58, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a little bit? 15:06, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

16:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sparrowtail (W) ~ For Approval
I can't do tabbies

17:40, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think the other images have a paler muzzle and chest? And a dark tail-tip. 18:20, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

19:14, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? And the stripes appear darker on the other images. 19:54, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I colorpicked the stripe color from the loner, so it should be decent now. If not I'll just darken the color of the stripes.

21:09, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

I feel as if the legs could use a tiny bit of shading depth. -- 23:06, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

00:07, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Ghost) - For Approval
i tried. modeled most of her pattern off her deputy image 18:29, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

wait, what about Jose's blank? 00:43, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight didn't stay in an unknown residence because she didn't die, so she'd get the ghost blank. -- 00:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be a neck stripe that doesn't reach all the way (see app, queen, and leader for what i mean). 15:06, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded also added a couple more stripes to the tail 04:11, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Moon (K) - CBA
moon child  18:50, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so, since the Sisters are said to be pretty much all long-furred (this is something that stands out to Squirrelflight and is noted pretty heavily), could you possibly make this into a long-furred kit? Given Moon is Moonlight's kit, and this is a prominent thing, I think it should be depicted on her kits as well. ​

Her father's pelt length is unknown and long fur is a recessive gene, so I thought it'd be find here since the long-haired mention is about the Sisters before she and her littermates are born, but I guess I can change it 19:03, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, but this is something that's pointed out for every cat in this group. Regardless of who the father might be, and given the Erins don't care about genetics, I'm not sure we can appropriately use that. ​​​​​

reup 23:01, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sparrow (Sister) (Ro) ~ CBA


CBA? 23:49, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Spiderleg (K) ~ CBA
ah the stinky boi i love 20:37, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little bit of brown to his belly Moo (talk) 21:36, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth some. -- 23:05, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! It's kinda hard to show the brown without adding too much.. 23:56, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

I feel you. There is also some leaking sharing above the tail on the haunch. It's light not dark Moo (talk) 00:17, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded!! 19:31, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Blade (KP) - CBA
this was so much fun; matched to david's ghost vers.

CBA? 23:50, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Tom (Unknown) ~ CBA
22:31, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Scorchfur (W) - CBA
22:43, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:51, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think the eyes are brighter in the other images?  Crystie  ''Can't help  loving  me  02:06, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Seedpaw (K) - CBA
-- 23:04, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think the eyes should be a bit more blue because they look completely white Moo (talk) 23:49, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They don't look that white to me? -- 23:51, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Idk I just know it doesn't look blue at all to me? Moo (talk) 00:16, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

It's cool, maybe your screen is acting up. It happens sometimes. -- 00:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Wikia also has some issues displaying certain colours, so always keep that in mind too for little things like eye-colour and such

While not white, these definitely do use a lot more of the lighter shades of the coloring spotted in the other images, which contain in ratio, more darker shade. Could you add a few more pixels of the darker shades for eye color present on the app/star?

Reuploaded -- 22:57, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Snow (Sister) (Ro) ~ For Approval
I really can't shade white cats lol

00:44, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading, smooth it out, and there's some waste under the tail, belly, and chest. -- 00:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to her face and ears. 00:59, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

16:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Waste along the tail, underneath the stomach, and above the head I believe. And maybe ad a little bit of shading on the haunch curve near the bottom; seems to jut out imo. 00:03, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

00:45, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shadowstar (K) ~ CBA


Cute. CBA? 23:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sorreltail (K) ~ CBA


CBA? 23:54, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Moonlight (Ghost) - CBA
01:27, September 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 23:54, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Palebird (W) - For Approval
Thanks for waiting for me! Tinystream (talk) 08:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Mallownose (W) - For Approval
Tinystream (talk) 08:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think the pupils could be evened out a bit. -- 12:52, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

How do I do that? I've messed around with them, but one is always either too small or too big. Tinystream (talk) 19:07, September 6, 2019 (UTC) In my experience it's usually easier to just make them rectangles, but you can look around at other people's charart for ideas. Can you also define the shading on the shoulder closest to us? 19:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reup I just ended up changing the pupils entirely since it was very frustrating to work with that. Also, I fixed up some stripe blur. Tinystream (talk) 19:31, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Stormcloud (W) - For Approval
I have never read Bramblestar's Storm, but I guess that this guy exists? He's got a nice name. 19:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be more stripes and them closer together? 23:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Skystar (K) - For Approval
I may have to redo the shading. Well, on the face, at least. Tinystream (talk) 20:29, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reup lessened some of the shading on the face. Tinystream (talk) 20:37, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think some more shading could be removed from the face, and the back of the ear fluff closest to us, too. 23:55, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Jake (unknown) ~ for approval
sorry this sucks so bad im sick as a dog right now ill probably fix some stuff later 21:07, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrel (sister) (Ki) For Evaluation
Okay since sombody is working on Moon I rebranded by Charart as Squirrel since they're also gray.Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit, since it looks too magenta and not a natural gray color. The shading needs to be defined a bit as well. And remember, don't thumb your images! Just go into source and remove the |thumb from the file name. There is a lot of waste around the character so make sure to remove that, and make sure "For Evaluation" is in the title. Sorry if this is lot to you -- 22:20, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh crud! Ur right I 4got 2 put "For Evaluation"Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh and  I removed the thumbnailBluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

This should also be uploaded as File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png. -- 22:30, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bte I tired remeoving the wast with the eraser but It won't go away! It's not ven visable when I edit the Charart on Paint.netBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I'll keep tryingBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! My bad The wast is visable on Paint.net it's just hard 4 me 2 c!Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:36, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I wouldn't use Paint, I would use GIMP or FireAlpaca to make images instead since they're way better in quality and can make the image look better (both are free). -- 22:37, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I c there's still waste! Dang It! I'll fix that imediately!

Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:32, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a lot more and expand it. The shading is far too overblurred, probably as a result of Gaussian Blur (which is not recommended as it causes shading to leak), so it could be sharpened some, retrace it with a 4px paintbrush or pencil and smudge it with a 6-10px brush at 40% strength. The lineart is also overblurred, to fix just erase on your shading layers, and the blurriness will be gone. -- 23:34, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Please continue to reupload over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png 23:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo the Charart since I merged the layers on Paint.net before I began to edit the Charart on Gimp Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:32, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Snowfur (Ki) ~ For Approval
I'm determined to do at least one image for all members of Bluestar's immediate family. Comments? 23:54, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Stormtail (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 23:54, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Tree (W) ~ For Approval
All colors from loner, which is the first in the set. Comments? 23:54, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (W) ~ For Approval
Ew. 01:18, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Stagleap (W) ~ For Approval
👌 02:04, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smokehaze (Ki) - For Approval
05:33, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading out

Beenose (Ki) - For Approval
I promise I'm not dead y'all 13:11, 9/07/2019

Drizzle (Ki) - For Approval
Thanks for saving me some of my images btw lol 13:41, 9/07/2019