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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. -- 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

These are lovely and I can't see anything to comment on, so CBA? 23:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but i feel like the blank looks slightly too crowded in general. notably the face (might help if you remove some of the lines on the ears ig?), and how does the blank look with those three lines removed on the cat's back leg? also, i feel like the tail still looks too straight–feel like a cats tail would naturally be more bent in such a position. 04:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

also, i feel like the linearart thickness is pretty uneven on the shorthaired blank– it's extremely thick on the cat's back and on the leg in which the paw pads are exposed but thin in other places. 04:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded The tail is based of something like this https://www.omlet.co.uk/images/cache/1024/604/Cat-Chartreux-a_plush_coated_chartreux_cat_lying_down.jpg]] with the tail being straight and just the tip being curled. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:39, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

That, to me, still shows it curving a bit more than what you've currently got here. I'd also maybe suggest shortening the leg with the visible toe beans? Not sure if you'd see that much leg from this angle, especially when you look at the blank without a tail.

I honestly think the tail looks fine. A cats tail is always flat to the ground 23:44, 8/05/2019

CBA? 04:48, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry but my comment about the leg showing the beans being too long, still stands as a part of my comment above.

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:18, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

One last thing, I promise, but the fur on our left backleg looks very clumpy, and I think it could be smoothed out more to match the other blanks style for that area (if that makes sense?) and with that, the same would be applied to the other leg too

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation
it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. top left corner. 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good!

'''reuploaded. '''

Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from this version, as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... ​​

Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base​ because she was the OA. 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. ​​

'''reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? 17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws.  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, too, overall. 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail. 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? 01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

After a month of it being on the approval page, the image will be declined, yes. Can you define the light on the tail, and just a tad bit on the front leg closest to us? 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the shading could still be lightened overall 02:45, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

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'''reuploaded. 23:08, July 27, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image still appears to be overblurred, try checking your layers for waste and removing it to reduce the blurryness. -- 23:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC) '''reuploaded. meadowslip, have mercy on me.'''

Lighten/smooth the shading. -- 01:36, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 03:00, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out more. Here's a little tip: If you're constantly being told to smooth out the shading, smooth it out a lot more than you usually do. I learned this and it really helps, trust me. -- 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. 19:47, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:59, July 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image has that overblurred look to it again. Try checking for waste to remove or see if the background is acting up. -- 20:02, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:56, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and add more shading depth in general to the image. -- 22:06, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:22, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some of the shading on the tail to define the lightsource, and add some more facial shading? 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 16:19, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing much light on the tail. -- 16:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 19:26, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the other half of the tail. -- 19:28, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reupreuploaded.

You're not defining the light on the correct tail section. Define it on >>> this side, away from the bend. -- 20:25, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you redline it, please? 20:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

When I can get the computer, I'll gladly make one for you. -- 21:46, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. 21:45, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

you go! Red is where there needs to be light, green is waste, and orange is where the shading needs to be defined. -- 21:53, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks, potato. 05:18, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Might you smooth out the tail shading and the shading on the visible back foot?

'''reuploaded. 18:59, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading on the back foot and tail, make sure you smooth it out when erasing. -- 16:51, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading on the -> ear? the earpink is a little hard to see <span style="">06:15 Mon Aug 5

'''reuploaded. 15:54, August 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add some more shading on the back end of the tail and in that odd patch in the middle of the front end. 03:48, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

There is a large amount of waste on the tail, and can you recede the shading some on that little shoulder line near the back and chest? I think it could be also smoothed out on the tail (which I showed you in the redline) and the back foot (not the back paw). Could you also add a thinner darker layer of shading to the image to help define the shading depth? -- 00:12, August 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

Lighten/smooth out the shading. Perhaps make the depth layer a tid thinner, and smooth it out as well. -- 00:52, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

Lighten the shading a lot more. -- 01:16, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

Define the light source. -- 04:07, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

Also define the edges of the shading some; it's all starting really get over blurred which is where, i think, you're losing your shading source 05:31, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

Much better!! Add a bit of shading under the chin and jaw. Add a bit of light to the top of the first part of the tail, at the bottom of the hind foot, and maybe a bit of light to the middle of the back 02:46, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.

I've created a redline for you. Red is where you can add shading, blue is where shading can be removed, and green is waste along the back. Hope this helps ^^ 14:59, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks, vec. ''' 18:44, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Remove a sliver of shading on the <--- front leg. 02:30, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Dark-colored ThunderClan kit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Hopefully you guys like it? Im really not good at shading because there are no tutorials for Pixlr char art --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:11, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Since this is from a manga, this needs to be in grayscale and needs a lighter muzzle. -- 23:13, July 30, 2019 (UTC) It is? What is grayscale? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:31, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Grayscale is the default manga color, so this must be defaulted to a darker gray. Could you also define the shading? -- 23:32, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

So a dark grey? With grey eyes? or can they stay green. And I can try shading but I dont know how to chade on Pixlr X which is what I need to use now... Thanks! Also Is there any other single colour blanks to do? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:37, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I would probably use a different program than Pixlr, such as GIMP or FireAlpaca, which are both free. Only the pelt would have to be in grayscale, the eyes and ear/nose pink can be any color you wish. You shade by getting a color, using the pencil tool to draw it on the pelt, lighten it, then blur/smudge it. -- 23:41, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I have a chromebook and am only allowed to use pixlr X... Im confused also by what you mean RIP... and ok! SO a dark grey pelt Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:43, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so you have a color wheel, right. Well, click on any color you want, then get your paintbrush/pencil tool and paint it following a clear light source like this, and then blur/smudge it with the respective tools to get a nice, smooth gradient. -- 23:46, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I cant use the blur tool won't work? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:53, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Try setting the blur tool at 100% strength and check the hard-edged box and see if it works then. -- 23:55, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

It seemingly appears pixely and won't smooth out? Sorry if this is getting long... Should I delete MY messages? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, all messages must stay on the approval page until the image is archived. I'd say post for now, and wait for further instruction. please excuse my lack of knowledge -- 00:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Its cool, Thank you! I will try to do it as best as possible. Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

NOOOO I just finished but then my wifi went out before I had saved it 0.o Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:39, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better? I have a version with the pencil lines but it doesn't look very good. If you dont like it could you fix the blur as pixlr just wont? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:31, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Please do not thumb your images. I've also renamed this to File:BP.kit-4.png so please continue to reupload over there. I'd also like to reiterate what Potato said that it is probably best if you do not use Pixlr, as it does not have a good history with images in this project. There are other free art programs, such as GIMP and Firealpaca, that can make this process easier; plus there are several members of the project who are familiar with those programs.

The shading should be darkened a little more, and maybe smoothed out. Your light source looks very good. ^^ 01:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I found a tool but it is a bit hard to use... would this next reupload be more along the right lines? Also whats Thumbing? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Thumbing is when the file name has a |left/right/thumb thing in the file name. To remove it, simply go into source editor and remove it from the name. -- 01:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded uhh ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Upload under the name Vec gave you. Smooth out the shading everywhere, and Remove the waste that's outside the lineart. -- 02:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think that might be the best I can do shading wise :( I did upload under BP.kit but i called it BP.kit-5? Hopefully, that was right... And can do! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:04, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, you need to upload over File:BP.kit-4.png. Simply click on the link, scroll down and click "Upload new version of file". Also, remove some of the shading on the tail and front limb; a similar light source that's easy to see is File:Dawnpelt.kit.alt.png. See how smooth the shading is and it's not covering all of the limbs? Try to match that. 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the base quite a bit, since the description is dark-colored kit. -- 02:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I'm back and ready for action! (I rage quitted yesterday because I had the PERFECT art but didn't save it and the Wifi went out Rip) Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 22:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Is this more along those lines? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:10, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

It's looking better, though I would recede the shading some, darken the earpink, and smooth out the shading on the tail. -- 01:13, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Please re-upload over File:BP.kit-4.png like you were told to do. 01:24, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I tried but it didn't work? I was gonna tell you but I forgot :( and ok Greenflower! Btw what do you mean recede the shading some? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC) Fixed! --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:30, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

By recede, I mean remove. -- 01:40, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Un-thumbed, Moved to Bp.kit-4, and '''Re-upped! T'''his a bit better? You guys are really picky about your charart rip me and my lil Pixlr editor Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:16, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Remember not to thumb your images. Darken the earpink a little bit. -- 03:41, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste by the haunch. 05:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

try #5b3c3c for a good earpink color! <span style="">06:19 Mon Aug 5

Ok thanks guys! Im right back at it! Doing that earpink now. Hopefully I get it right! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 21:48, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''':) Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 21:57, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink is so much better! However, I think the nosepink should also be darkened too, as darker cats usually have either a dark maroon or gray nose. -- 21:59, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

YAy! Reuploaded Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 22:18, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading a tiny bit on the face and haunch/flank/main body area a bit, to make the light source a bit clearer. -- 22:30, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think I can... Is this acceptable or do I have to try? It won't look as smooth... Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:01, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

No, nonsense! All you have to do is erase the shading in those areas some, and smooth it out again! =) -- 23:06, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

I can try? The problem is It doesn't save the separate layers so when I open it they all merge... Meaning I don't have a top-line art layer or a separate shading layer. But I can try for you!

I might be able to help you with that. What program are you using? -- 23:13, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Pixlr still XD Im trying now tho!Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:14, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think this may be the best I can do? with my limited software... I can try tho? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:32, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

You've done a good job on this so far! I suggest you use a different art program instead of Pixlr... I've never used it, but I've heard it's pretty outdated and not the easiest to work with. A couple programs that you could try are GIMP and FireAlpaca (I believe both of those are free?) Could you smooth the shading so it appears more gradient on the face, tail, and a bit on the haunch? Blend the earpink into the pelt too, it looks fairly sharp at the moment, and define the light on the arm. 02:45, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

I can only use pixlr... I would use others if I could! Im going to revise (I think thats the right word) The art and reshow it to you patch because I think it looked better... I figured out a way to save layers tho! YAYYYY! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:47, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I had short term access to Firealpaca and might again next wednesday So wish me gl! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 06:01, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the body and face some more? 19:09, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Hopefully its ok????

Recede the shading past the eye on the face, darken the shading a bit, fill in the leaking shading on the haunch, and smooth the shading out more. -- 22:56, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Aww I really want to do this but I just cant seem too... I'm just clogging up the page Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 08:22, August 8, 2019 (UTC)

Don't worry about having a lot of comments. I've had a lot of them too when I posted my first image.

Back to the image, it might be just me, but the ear looks cut off. Also, the shading depth could be defined. Do this by adding a darker, thinner layer of shading on top of your existing shading.

Sorry patch and green I had to go sorry be back soon maybe Pm me on discord? (Ask on my talk page) Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 22:28, August 8, 2019 (UTC)

Per the description, this needs a pale muzzle. -- 23:29, August 8, 2019 (UTC)

Also, could you define the eye depth? I would use the burn tool and lightly burn over the bottom of the eye and make a soft gradient. -- 23:15, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 01:50, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

I am now! I got a brand new computer yesterday and got Firealpaca, And so I need some tips! I'm going to restart the whole kit. Is that ok? Moo (talk) 02:00, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better?Moo (talk) 04:45, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

The background should be transparent, not white. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 10:59, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Redlines for everyone! Red is where you can add shading, and blue is where you should erase it. 15:00, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

What do the Redlines mean? ah ok. And I can fix the background easily thanks! Moo (talk) 22:03, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did the redline thing and fixed the background! Moo (talk) 22:09, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

there's waste along the back and i don't see a difference with the muzzle. 03:21, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

I already did the muzzle but I can make it lighter, I also deleted waste. I'm working on the new muzzle  nowMoo (talk) 04:17, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded-_Waste_deleted_ And the muzzle is made lighter!Moo (talk) 04:32, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good now! You've improved quite a bit! There's a little bit of leaking shading I see. To fill it in, just get your color of shading and patch it. Can you also smooth out the shading a slight bit more? -- 13:44, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Can you do me a redline thing like Vec? I have no idea where the leaking is and I barely know what leaking is but thanks! Moo (talk) 21:12, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Leaking means the shading is ebbing away from the lineart or where you originally put it. It can happen if you overblur an area, or use too strong of a blur setting for a small area. Got the redline here, but I didn't see a lot. 02:33, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Ok thanks! Is this better? Moo (talk) 03:31, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
18:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred and need to be thinner. Define the eye depth and light on the foreleg. -- 18:57, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She needs short fur. 18:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

oh shoot, sorry patch. 19:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

This needs to match to the apprentice's side in terms of the stripes. -- 20:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

There is also some waste in front of the head, by the back legs and around the butt. (Am I allowed to say that?) <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong  <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 16:18, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

you can call the bottom area the haunch. sorry for being inactive. 17:48, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:55, August 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Sharpen the stripes more, and the stripes are thinner and darker. -- 16:11, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and remove some on the tail and foreleg. 03:50, August 7, 2019 (UTC

'''reuploaded. '''

The stripes are too dark, and there should be more in general. -- 17:06, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Her stripes appear more horizontal on her other images. Reference the apprentice for them since it's on the same side. 19:11, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Try to curve the stripes so that they look like they are on a 3D surface.

'''reuploaded. '''

Give the stripes some variation, just so they don't look the same. Also, match the stripes to her apprentice. -- 16:42, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:15, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

Stripes are too dark, and they should be smudged more to match the other images in her set. -- 03:03, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. '''

Define the light source. -- 15:12, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:44, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

There is some waste floating around her face, ear, and legs. Add some shading around her neck, kinda in the shape of a collar as seen here. -- 20:46, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:50, August 11, 2019 (UTC)'''

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and smudge the stripes a little. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 21:19, August 11, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:14, August 11, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smudge the stripes more. <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  10:26, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

''i can't, or else the the stripes will be all.. blurry. 18:06, August 12, 2019 (UTC)''

Try a 1px smudge tool with a low rate to see if that works. The light should be defined some on the tail and foreleg. -- 18:17, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 21:25, August 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

reuploaded. 23:15, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Redline for the pattern. The apprentice's shoulder stripes are not cooperating with this blank -.- Also add some shading in the stomach area and smooth out the tail shading. The stripes also appear darker on the other images. 15:14, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thank you. ''' 18:45, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light some on the tail? Since it's a small space, I would erase with a 1px eraser and dust off a few pixels touching the haunch, then smooth it out. -- 13:46, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred a bit, then it looks like they were smudged vertically with a small brush, probably 1px. 15:01, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (W) - For Evaluation
06:03, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a little bit and add some to the bottom of the chest, to make that area look less flat

can you define the light on the front legs and the tail? <span style="">11:22, 8/10/2019

Add more shading to the very end of the tail and the back leg closest to us. -- 16:16, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 16:47, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

By adding more shading to the very end of the tail, I mean a line of shading stretching from the current tail shading to the tail-tip. -- 16:58, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:29, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you define the light on the tail some, and add more shading stretching from the back to the back leg? -- 17:41, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:46, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

Yes! This is looking very good, Ripple. Can you add a slight bit of light to the back leg closest to us? Probably near the toe area. Can you also define the light on the front leg farthest from us slightly? -- 20:48, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thank you. 19:55, August 11, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you define the light on the front leg a little more? <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  01:09, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:41, August 13, 2019 (UTC)'''

More redlines! Green is waste, red you should add shading (mostly on the front legs some more, and blue is where you should remove shading. 15:16, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks. ''' 18:54, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the head and add some (not a lot) to the ---> front limb. You're so close! 12:13, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:01, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg, on the mid-section of the front leg closest to us, and just slightly on the other front leg as well, plus add a small amount of shading on the paw on said leg. Light should also be defined on the tail, on the mid-section that touches the bottom part of the haunch/back leg. Soften the eye gradient some as well. Add more shading depth (thin layer of shading) to the front leg farthest from us, the back paw farthest from us, and the ears and chin. alright I'm done now lol -- 13:50, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Owlstar (SotC) (ki) ~ for approval
13:07, August 11, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth the circle of shading on his cheek?

Reuploaded 18:46, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe smooth out the shading in general? 16:10, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 15:02, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Millie (Ki) ~ For Approval
this pattern was a pain in the butt to figure out  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <18:14, 8/12/2019> ​

Extend the shading into the bend of the haunch/hip a bit more 04:18, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you show me where? I'm not quite sure.

Plumwillow (W) ~ For Approval
Another Plumwillow! :P <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  04:14, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading along <--- front limb, and could you add some shading on the very bottom of the haunch where it meets the hind foot, and along the hind foot too? Let me know if that doesn't may any sense >.> 16:07, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this okay? <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  01:17, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

This is looking great! I would define the shading some on the back leg and foreleg, and maybe a little light on the tail wouldn't hurt to be defined either. -- 01:23, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Potato!!! :D <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  12:41, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Redline! Red is where you should add shading (missing in a few places, such as the head), and blue is where you should remove shading (most notably on the tail). 15:19, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Vec!!! <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  08:32, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light just a little on the front leg farthest from us, there's also a slight bit of waste outside said leg as well. -- 13:53, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  ''<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  11:35, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Riverstar (K) - For Approval
Sorry I've been gone for so long. Tinystream (talk) 20:52, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the dorsal tail stripe a bit. 15:28, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Rosetail (K) - For Approval
I didn't really know how to do the stripes. Tinystream (talk) 20:52, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes should be a little thicker; and smudged to with a small brush to give the illusion of texture. the old warrior is a really good point of reference; for the stripes and the style used by beebs

Poppydawn (W) - For Approval
Tinystream (talk) 20:52, August 16, 2019 (UTC)

could you add a little bit of shading to the bottom of the tail?

Is it me, or am I seeing gray pixels on the top of the tail? -- 13:54, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

I think the base should be redder, and more stripes on the shoulder. 15:25, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Petal (K) - For Approval
14:29, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading some?

reup 23:24, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Princess (K) ~ For Approval
I'll add the collar in the next upload

The shading could be defined just a touch. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:41, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Sun Shadow (W) - For Approval
Was mistakenly called a warrior in Shadowstar's Life. -- 16:02, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Eyes seem much brighter on the other images. 21:45, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:36, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Just for reference, the first image in this set is the loner. You should be colorpicking from that one. ​​

Reuploaded -- 00:29, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

could you maybe shrink the pupils? might just be me but he looks kinda stoned

00:32, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:33, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Perchkit (K) - For Approval
-- 16:30, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Same with Sun Shadow. And the base color seems a tad darker on the star? 21:46, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:36, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Rabbittail (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 18:27, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could be smoothed on the front leg closest to us. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:40, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:20, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (TC) (W) ~ CBA
Comments? 18:27, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 00:38, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt. W) ~ CBA
Comments? 18:27, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 00:39, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Fog (Ki) ~ For approval
i mightve forgotten i had this reserved 21:24, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes seem to have more light blue in their leader image. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 10:32, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

i cant fit in all of it since the eyes are smaller. 19:04, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Ratscar (Alt. W) - For Approval
-- 16:02, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading a bit? ​

Reuploaded -- 00:29, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Can you match the eyes with the warrior? 00:39, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:33, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Rileypool (Alt Ki) - For Approval
He is not the same color as Graystripe, what in the world were these editors thinking? Which, I might need to darken the base a bit...hm. ​​​

Rosepetal (Kit) ~ For Approval
tis she 18:15, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the tail and foreleg? 00:40, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

Purdy (K) - For Approval
My king 18:28, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Plumclaw (W) - For Approval
18:48, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Runningwind (K) ~ For Approval
20:10, August 18, 2019 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) ~ For Approval
20:10, August 18, 2019 (UTC)