Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, can you Shelly? I don't want to waste time trying to get them right. 15:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

My pleasure. I re-uploaded it, here's the changes since they won't show regularly: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/9/96/20120402190120!Ferncloud.kit.png 19:02, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste down by her paw on ---> side. 20:45, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart also seems a little thick on her left hind paw... 01:54, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks Shelly~ 19:57, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's also waste on her paw on <-- side. 13:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:39, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the queen. 15:55, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (W) - Redone
Comments? :3 OA was Dappleclaw. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ;3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'highlights', darken the shading on the back, add depth to the eye (or define it), and to add on to what Skt said, make the earpink more triangular. 16:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC).

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 18:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

For some reason it's not reuploading and sparking Mooneh rage. >.> 18:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I got it. Re-uploaded. 18:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Move the ear pink more into the ear and lower the opacity a tiny bit. 19:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit as well~ 23:07, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading. 03:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had the black cat expert around me, and this happened. x3 00:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 00:50, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:13, 04 09, 2012

Darken the whole image a bit? He looks dark gray now. 07:29, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit too red. Make a bit more pinkish? 21:10, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:14, 04 11, 2012 13:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Okay...now can you define the shading? x3 13:32, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:07, 04 12, 2012

The earpink is too small, fix that. Also, darken the earpink to a more redder hue, but, as a dull red, and lighten up the whole image. I can hardly see the lineart. 01:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ...I read your comment wrong. -goes to fix earpink again- Anyway, I'm not making it lighter because I was already asked to make it darker as it looked dark gray, so if I do...yeah. 04:43, 04 13, 2012

Oh, then can you lighten up the shading on the hindlegs and the top of the neck/head? 06:15, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (W) ~ Tweaked
She needed a plumy tail. Breeze whisker  21:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

It kind of looks a bit boxish to me... Can you round the top? 21:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a bit too plumy... Maybe thin it out so it looks a bit like Squirrelflight's tail? 22:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know. Squirrelflight's tail is "bushy" not "plumy" I can thin it out a little, but I don't think it needs to look like her tail. Maybe it would be better if I were to lengthen the lines showing the fur how it is now so it looks longer, and maybe curve in it a little. Breeze whisker  03:31, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I mean keep the fluffiness, just make it a bit thinner and maybe make the underside like Squirrelfight's and point the tip a bit more. 04:11, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya make the tail highlight (or whatever) look more silvery like the other patches of light? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 20:30, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thin it out just a tad, and maybe make it more ragged or something x3 07:26, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, you can work from this image for reference on floofyness. I'd say at least have the lineart on the tail showing fluffiness extend inward a bit more. 20:31, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined 19:32, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. She's a pain in the rear. Breeze whisker  02:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the curve on < side, and maybe make the lines on > side for the furry bits a bit longer. 16:29, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think the one with less line art looks better. The length extensions look less neat IMO. Breeze whisker  23:01, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (A) ~ Redone
Here it is. I tried really hard, so... Comments away! Oh, and OA was Leaf-storm.

05:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The color looks like it has a little more yellow in it than the warrior. 22:55, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:22, April 10, 2012 (UTC

Define the haunch/tail shading. My gosh, Thistle, this is so perrty~<3 09:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thankies. :3 23:04, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the brown a tad duller. :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:23, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes fade out just a bit. 05:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean by 'fade out'. o3o 01:42, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think she's saying make the tips of the stripes fade instead of them being pointy...like the warrior, perhaps. 04:45, 04 13, 2012

Oakheart (W) - Redone
Oh god. I made it too red didn't I. ;-; OA is Hiddensun, and his colour had to match his apprentice/deputy image. Maple On dA and Skye

00:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC) OA and reason for redo? And yeah, I think you might have made it a bit too red, desaturate him a bit. 03:29, 10, 04, 2012

There's waste all around the image, Maple. 05:58, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors are off, and the highlights look a bit pink, could you fix that? 06:46, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Waste removed, Highlights fixed, and less red. :D Next? Maple On dA and Skye 21:07, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors still don't match. :S 23:19, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit of waste on the left border. 07:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Colour taking isn't working. >.< So I redid it, cause the shading is bugging me. Maple On dA and Skye 18:03, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.' Wait, fixed colour. Thanks Cloudy. :3 Maple On dA and Skye 11:17, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste aaround his muzzle. -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 13:02, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 16:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you just blur the shading more? 06:16, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 16:32, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading a tad more. 19:12, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) ~ Redo
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a girl? ouo 19:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

To confirm, I did a tweak on it. I noticed you weren't sure. 19:56, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Bramblestar (A) - For Approval
Hey guys! I put a pale belly on him. 8D OA was BeautifulOblivion. Comments? 03:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Realized there was waste on muzzle. 03:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

He needs paleness on the underside of his tail. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge it, please, and have it come further up his neck to match the other images. 04:36, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Also, it needs to be darker and under the stripes, not on top of them... are you the OA for this version of the image? Because I noted in my nomination that first dibs go to OAs that have the layered files. 04:38, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's also some waste around his chin and chest. 00:07, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I don't have the Original file sooooo. I guess I'm giving this up. ono 03:26, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Next time, please remember to change the heading. Anyone with a free project may take over. 19:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No actually Ivy, they can't. XD The old OA of this has to take over. :P That's why Thistle withdrew it. XD 22:57, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

All right, all right. I'll do it >.> Rowanclaw's getting neglected again... 23:01, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:28, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Duke (KP) ~ Redone
Woo 8D I know the earpink is weird, I'm fixing it in a moment...the collar, ears, and eyes are the exact same, so I'm not changing them. Comments? :3 17:12, 04 11, 2012

The eyes look kinda pixily, make the eye gradient smooth  17:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, I can't really see it. 17:17 Wed Apr 11

Re-uploaded. 17:37, 04 11, 2012

Maybe make the black on the haunch curve a bit more? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 10:04, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail stripe to make it flow with the pelt more. Skt, I can't, because I'd have to paint over or remove what's on the haunch now, remember how I blurred so it looked the same, and then it would curve...I tried, and it looked unnatural. Sorry Dx 12:00, 04 12, 2012

Psssh, no apologise, twas just a suggestion. ;3 Make the nose pink a little less neon, and define the earpink a smidge? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">13:32, 04 12, 2012

Define the shading towards the end of the tail  00:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (ki) - Redone
OA is...I have no idea. DX Anyway, it has to match his apprentice image. I think I did a better job on this than I did on the other ones. Comments? Maple On dA and Skye 22:41, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. c: 22:57, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading, actually. 23:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 01:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. 19:33, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

The color still doesn't match. Would you like me to give you the hex code from the apprentice image?

Skye, do you mind? I'd really appreciate it. :3 Maple On dA and Skye 10:52, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

The hex color is <font color="#AB4619">#AB4619 .

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 11:16, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a tad and blur it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 00:15, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 01:11, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (E) - Redone
Hmmmm..... not my best. And I know, I forgot the ragged ear. I'll add that in a bit. OA was Sandstar with tweaks by Splashy and Bloo. Was redone cause the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 05:38, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, so yea, the ragged ear. Also, darken/define the shading a bit? 14:01, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) ~ Tweak
Haven't done a tweak/redo in a bit, so I though I would just do this. ono And plus I love Dark Forest cats cx Needed a torn ear. 00:57, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a bit shallower. If that much of his ear had been ripped in that direction, the entire top of his ear would likely be gone. 01:45, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP) ~ Withdrawn
Patches needed to match more lol. OA's=Maplefern (I think? xD), and a redo from me. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:33, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad? :33  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 12:59, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Ima withdraw this to hopefully get something else. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:13, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (A) - Redone
OA was Shimmerpool with a redo with the new blanks by our wonderful, talented, and epic Mountainheart. Needed to match other chararts. Comments? 03:38, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken and smudge the stripes a bit, and add a back stripe. Though it's hard to see on his other images, it's there, and so it should be added. 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (Ki) ~ Redone
He was a triangly tabby. OA's= Shaf Girl with a redo by Mistypebble. i don't think the changes are showing... <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 04:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the brown tail tip thingy C:  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 12:58, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes on his forehead, legs, and tail to match the warrior. 18:02, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:40, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyflower (W) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows. The smudges were blurred and looked like blobs, and the shading could have been defined a tad. To me she looks kind of bare now D:. 19:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I love it<3 Blur the smudge on the haunch. 21:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Add more patches, this way it's unrealistic. I also suggest blurring the patches, since they look hard-edged, or, smudge it more dramaticly using a bigger brush like the pervious version. Define the earpink and enlarge it. 01:14, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. Good job Silver! <span style="">03:54, 14, 04, 2012

Reuploaded I killed it... D:  14:21, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the patch on the haunch. 19:04, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Which version are you looking at Shade? xD Sorry. The one with not many patches, or more patches? 19:08, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (Le) ~ Redone
... :3 Comments? 00:37, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Something about the chest shading's funny. I'm not quite sure what it is, but it makes the chest look.... flat. Not sure what the problem is exactly, but could you try fixing it? 16:21, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful. Lighten the shading down the back a bit. And who was the OA? (Unless we don't have to put that anymore, I just got back here). 19:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ Redone
...Paleh watched me make this. I failed on her previous version. XD 00:43, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bigger? 14:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:35, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Watched? XD I helped you make her. :P Blur the earpink a little dear. 16:23, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (A) ~ Redone
Um OA was DJ. Comments? 04:58 Sat Apr 14

I don't how dark the stomach looks. Could you maybe lighten it, but keep in in shade so the light source is consistent? If you'd rather keep it like that, then do. Breeze whisker  22:52, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (Ki) ~ Redone
Yay I've finished them all. OA was Cloudy. Comments? 21:09 Sat Apr 14

Feathertail (A) ~ Tweaked
She needed a plumy tail. 8D First tweak~ *is failed* 23:39, April 14, 2012 (UTC)