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Wasptail (W) ~ For Evaluation
The stripes aren't the most matching and best I know, but I like it. I'll tweak them better after advice. 10:36, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Waste 10:39, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you add some shading depth! They're very pretty!! 19:23, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Given your light source, flip the shading on the top of the tail to the bottom of the tail. And perhaps recede the shading on the chin and muzzle? The stripes should also be more jagged to match the apprentice. Whoops didnt see you already commented on that 20:07, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

The stripes should be thinner and sharper, more jagged like Egg said. Overall, I think what Thunder had originally matches better in terms of stripe style if you want to reference that ^^ 21:27, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you give the stripes a bit of a more "fuzzy" look to match the set? I think using a rough/fuzzy brush and continually smudging back and forth will help to achieve that. -- 23:44, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

I don't seem to have the brush in my paint program. Maybe I could just smudge the stripes? (I use Medibang paint pro) 01:56, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

If you don't have a fuzzy brush, try smudging with a 1px brush back and forth. -- 01:59, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up I hope they're fuzzier 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the face? 21:26, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. It's looking good! 21:39, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Thanks! 23:32, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

https://vvcap.com/BU9i3RstJ here's a redline for shading that's leaking, to fix it, just use your paintbrush/pencil tool (whatever one you use) and fill it in so all the pixels are filled up to the line art. https://vvcap.com/DDz3migeT here's another reline where shading needs to be added/defined, i didn't redline the face, but could you define the shading depth there too? with the placement you're using, there shouldn't be shading on the back of the tail like you have it right now. you're doing a great job on this! 17:03, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up  09:43, January 12, 2020 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail, because in the last update, it disappeared and add a little shading to the back leg closest to us. This looks very good. C: 03:54, January 13, 2020 (UTC)

I would darken the shading tint some - I am aware it is artist choice, usually, but when it is plopped next to the apprentice, it's a stark difference and throws off the set coherency imo. Just making it darker, with perhaps a touch more brown, should do.

Maybe smooth the shading, too? 19:45, January 13, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up I didn't really 'add a touch of' brown, because the shading was purple. Perhaps I should make it black/brown? 03:16, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

With your source, the shading on the top of the tail needs to be on the bottom. Smooth out the shading, and yes tint it black/brown. -- 03:25, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Made the tint black. 09:53, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more, add light to the front paws and shading to the back paws, and there's some leaking shading on the haunch. -- 13:52, January 14, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up  00:07, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paws, I think you may have removed too much. Smooth out the shading, especially on the shoulder and haunch, and expand/define it on the face. Curve the back leg shading to the way it is positioned (example here) and do the same for <<< that ear. Also lighten the earpink, it is too dark and doesn't match the apprentice. -- 00:12, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but could you add some depth to the face. 20:56, January 15, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up  01:38, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

The shading on the legs seems a tad overblurred, which still makes the shading hard to see in that area. Also, add more shading along the face (expand it) and to help, add some shading surrounding the muzzle. -- 01:45, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

Define shading in the ear and the shading depth on --> side. way down  hadestown    |undefined    01:52, 1/17/2020 ​

Re-up  23:20, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference. Add more shading to the legs and trace the muzzle with shading. -- 23:34, January 17, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up  04:40, January 18, 2020 (UTC)

Maybe add some more shading on ---> front paw and more on ---> side of the face and neck area? 03:51, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Willowpelt (K) - For Approval
this is gross 04:17, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Whereabouts is your light source coming from?

It is the source I've used on Rainwhisker, Hatchkit, Stormfur, and a few others. Should I change anything? -- 13:32, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

I understand it’s a source you’ve used before, but, I can’t tell where it’s coming from. I can do up a redline to help if you could let me know where the lights coming from - I’m about to head to work so I’m not much use right now.

I think it's ^^^ (because the light is shining on the bottom)? Gah, I can't explain my own sources for the life of me. -- 21:50, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

If it's going up, the back top tail, where it's being cut off by shading, should also be covered in shadow as well, or it looks like the lights are pointing from east to west. That could be a different light source, if you removed the shading on the back legs farthest from us. ❀ m ei ❀ GOGO BEBE 14:33, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 00:27, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

The shading on <--- ear looks a little blotchy. And I think with this lightsource, there'd be less shading on the face/cheek (where the head meets the neck; there'd still be shading on the neck area but here it seems to extend beyond that) and more shading on <--- side of the haunch. See this and this for what I mean if this helps ^^ 03:50, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

White rogue (R) - For Approval
Lineart tweaks galore - twisted whiskers and messy fur. -- 20:13, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

I have no idea if this is based off the image in Rise of Scourge or not, but the fur looks like drawn on stripes over actual messy fur. Could you perhaps change that around, and maybe tweak the lineart? I'm thinking like this, but it's subject to however you please.

21:11, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 21:21, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

Would you perhaps like a redline? 00:10, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Yes please! -- 01:21, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

https://vvcap.com/bITXuZlYZ Here's one over the image you're making, and one over just the blank so it's hopefully easier to make out https://vvcap.com/nNnESuIsJ The fur on your image now doesn't "pop" much with it only being on the inside of the image and looks a bit unnatural. The fur that you do have looks a little too uniform (particularly on the legs) and triangular in shape, in some spots? I can't think of another word to describe it. blagh I can't explain things correctly right now, very sorry. If you need me to elaborate on anything, feel free to shoot me a DM on discord^^ Hope the redline helps. 17:38, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Riverstar (Ro) - CBA
20:48, January 19, 2020 (UTC)

can you smooth out those three lines of, i think its texure, on the back? lookin epic ❀ m ei ❀ GOGO BEBE 14:35, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:40, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

CBA?

Light-colored rogue (Ro) - For Approval
19:02, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Expand the shading and define the lightsource on the tail. -- 19:38, January 20, 2020 (UTC)

Specifically, add some shading on --> ear and maybe a few lines to define the shoulder and haunch curves, kinda like how Patch has it on the rogue above ^^ 03:52, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (K) For Evaluation
I color picked from the kit but used the warrior as a reference. I also probably have to fix the shading and everything because I did this at 1am when my brain doesn’t work-- 22:08, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Sharpen the texture a lot more. I'd recommend asking Finch for the warrior's file, I feel tht will help a bit. -- 22:29, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Actually, the texture could almost stay as is considering the original kit was first in the set, followed by the apprentice (which also has a softer texture than the redone warrior). Maybe smudge the earpink a little more for now?

Reuploaded  I already redid the texture, I softened the ear pink too-- 22:51, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Define the texture, I do believe you oversmudged it. -- 22:52, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded texture-- 23:06, January 21, 2020 (UTC)