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Spotpaw (A) - CBA
I know this one needs a lot of work, so let the critique begin.  JOLLY  FIRE  14:37, November 23, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the texture? Nice work! Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:01, November 23, 2018 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the stripes, they seem sharper on the kit. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 17:07, November 23, 2018 (UTC)

Can you desaturate the earpink a little bit?Heyoitpotater (talk) 17:26, November 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm new to texture so I'm still trying to figure it out. I fixed some other little things that were bothering me as well ^^  JOLLY  FIRE  18:07, November 23, 2018 (UTC)

The --> ear should have a little shading on it, it doesn't seem to have any. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 18:19, November 23, 2018 (UTC)

To expand on Mink's comment, could you define the shading in both ears, actually? I can't see any shading there at all. ​​​​

i cant see any spots. 20:15, November 23, 2018 (UTC)

The kit has a lot lighter texture - maybe make the texture a very light brown or white? :o 04:15, November 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'll tackle the texture issue next when I have more time!  JOLLY  FIRE  14:44, November 24, 2018 (UTC)

It might be my eyes or the overall darkness of the image (the kit also has this going on), but I'm still unable to see the spots on the pelt. Is it possible to add a couple more or define them? If not, I totally understand and won't push it. ​​​

Reuploaded. Ya know, I'm really liking how this is starting to turn out! 22:36, November 25, 2018 (UTC)

As beautiful as it is, I'm still not seeing any spots here, even with my screen brightness on maximum and blinding me. On the kit, you can clearly see spots on the legs and flank. Maybe, make them larger or add more of them? Also, I don't think there are any paler parts on the kit? I think that's just the way the shadows are on the kit. 22:48, November 25, 2018 (UTC)

Where specifically do you suggest I put more spots? The spots on the kit image are kind of hard to see, so that's why there's not a lot of them here. Also, those aren't paler parts, they are highlights. Would you like me to dim them anyways? 22:54, November 25, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, please dim the highlights, or perhaps fiddle with the layer settings so they don't appear as...prominent. It makes them look like paler parts, specially on the paws and chest. And I created a red line to help you. I tried to follow the pattern on the kit with some creative liberty, of course. It's a rough paint job that's an understatement Vec, but it should give you an idea of what I mean. Even with my brightness at 3/4th, I can see the spots on the kit. I also circled them on the kit as my reference. I hope this works for you? 23:48, November 25, 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Vec, that red line is super super helpful. I'll work on it when I have some time this week. I was trying to do "spotty" stripes, where the stripes are broken up a bit to look like spots. 01:39, November 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If anyone comments that they can't see the spots now, I'm gonna bonk them on the head! xD 23:11, November 26, 2018 (UTC)

The spots are super cute! Can you define the stripes a bit more?

Reuploaded. 00:18, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 21:08, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to break this, but could you define/add (if they are not present) some stripes across the chest and the lower segments of the limbs? And could you also smooth out the highlight on the face 03:37, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. No problem! I also freshened up the texture a bit, since I felt that it was getting lost in everything else that is going on. 23:46, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 02:57, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

Frondpaw (A) - For Approval
I'm so sorry in advance. 22:52, November 27, 2018 (UTC)

This is stunning Thunder! The texture on the haunch seems super stark and uneven - could you smudge it and even it out a lil? Also, the stripes are a bit lighter on the kit.

Thank you! Can you elaborate on what you mean by the texture being stark and uneven? I'm not fully understanding what you're asking me to fix here lmao. 23:29, November 27, 2018 (UTC)

What Riin means is that the texture is too sharp, and you should soften it some. Also, I think adding some more texture would help the unevenness; there appears to be more on the kit 23:33, November 27, 2018 (UTC)

^ Essentially what Vec said. You also want your texture to flow with the character instead of being crisscrossed. This is what I generally try to do, but that may be up to inrepretation? Also there's a lil bit of waste under the tail and on the back of the haunch.

Reuploaded I think I got it? Frondpaw was a tad difficult lol. Do you mind pointing out the waste? I can't see it on my screen. 00:20, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

This should help!

Reuploaded Thank you! Believe I got it all. 00:38, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading a little bit, especially on the back leg/haunch area as well as the front leg closest to us? 20:40, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:03, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

Could you add some more texture to haunch, and there's some waste in the tiny space between the furthest hind paw from us and front limb closest to us. 03:40, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:48, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

Is the ear pink in this --> ear leaking into the lineart? 23:48, November 29, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste outside the chin.Heyoitpotater (talk) 00:30, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

@Hawkey I don't think so? It's not displaying it on my screen.

@Potato I don't see any waste? Your screen may be dirty, or my screen isn't displaying it. 02:51, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

As ridiculous as this sounds, I wasn't wearing my glasses at the time LOL. It looked like the ear pink was leaking into the lineart. I just compared your image to the apprentice blank and it's completely fine. Sorry about the confusion! 03:19, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

It's not my screen. There is waste there, what I would do is click and drag Frondpaw to a new computer tab, and then it'll say "latest (139x134)". The background is black so it'll be easy to spot the waste. That's how I find waste on PCA images.Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:26, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got it. 03:42, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

DOn't really know if i can make this comment,and im not trying to offend, but the stripe pattern looks...all of the place and not really stripe like Malina457 (talk) 17:42, November 30, 2018 (UTC)malina

Considering the kit image is just like this, I'm not sure it can be changed without nominating the kit.

Tunneler blank - For Approval


22:16, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

Is there any chance you could size these down? 22:17, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what the line across their flank is supposed to be? Also can you make the ear facing us a little smaller? 23:03, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

Agreed with Hawk's statements. I think you should smooth the lineart a bit and there are extra lines that sorta don't make sense to me.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:22, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:29, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Based off her Ultimate Guide picture. I'm unsure about the neck shading hh..

I'm crying this is so gorgeous. Yeah, the neck shading seems overly dark. Can you lighten it some? Also, the white on her paws can be lightened as well. 23:04, November 30, 2018 (UTC)

I actually think the neck shading looks fine. It just adds a nice twist. 02:14, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

The paws should be lightened as Hawk said, can you define the shading on the haunch area?Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:18, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

Are we making images based on official art now?

Yes, Fox. 02:43, December 1, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded