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Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Highlights needed to be blurred, but I re-did the shading. OA was Mousetalon with a redo by Oblivion and tweaks by Paleh, Scarlet and Icestorm. 21:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Waste inbetween the legs, m'dear, Fire. 21:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

XD That always happens. Re-Uploaded. 21:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:55 Sat Feb 11

Re-Uploaded. 15:03, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

She's getting a bit gray from the shading. Could you saturate her more? 16:24, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:05, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Her eyes look red? Maybe change it to a more orangy colour? Sky To Kill An Empire  02:47, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

XD I forgot about this. Re-Uploaded. 22:54, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail shading. Sky To Kill An Empire  00:54, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading consistant in shades. In some places it is dark, in some lighter, blend it all together. 06:34, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

'Re-Uploaded. I tried my best. :/ 21:49, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Waste between the leg and on her back. 00:50, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:30, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch shading a little more? This is pretty~ 01:53, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - How's this? 18:12, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading. 18:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make her eyes more amber and less orange/red. 23:13, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 13:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Q) - Tweaked
I tweaked the color shade to make it darker. Original Artist is Mumble I think, with a minor tweak by Ivy and a tweak/redo by Paleh. What do you think? 23:12, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Purdy <3 Lighten the shading a tad. 23:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great and all, but why'd it need to be darkened? She looked dark gray before, and she's not meant to be black.... 04:30, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Because the rogue and loner images didn't match. I added it to the tweak list. Check 'em out yourself. 04:37, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

EDIT: if anything, now it's too dark. Try taking the dodge tool over it once at about...20 %. 04:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Mmm... Not sure about this one. 05:43, Mon, Feb, 13, 2012

I'm only gonna comment and say that the color matches now. Much better, DJ. 05:51, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail and haunch shading. Sky To Kill An Empire  11:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the stomach. -- Elork   13:58, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to disagree Cloudy, but looking at them side by side, this is actually a bit light. Could you darken it, and darken the shading too? 10:32, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. 06:17, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

Define the shading. It seems a bit blotchy. :3 04:59, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

REuploaded -  02:02, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

She looks a little brown, add more dark grey and less brown, if that makes any sense. 20:11, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I think it's now too tinted blue/green. Should I change it back? 03:26, Sun, Feb, 19, 2012

Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Ah, tweaking. =D Anyway, it was on the list for shading, so, I just layered some shading overtop of the image, not major or anything. Okay, I think the OA was Snowfeather1 with some help along the way from Night shine. Comments? 02:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and blur them 03:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and chest. Elork  01:48, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid the shading. x.x 02:32, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge, blur, and lighten the earpink. 20:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 23:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

And thicken it. 15:59, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, ya still working on this? 19:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Read my comments on Brightflower. 05:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Could I take over? :P 18:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 18:42, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I redid the shading and the ear pink and replaced the highlights 19:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, next time, change the heading. XD 20:22, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC)- Tweaked


I think I died while making him....I swear I did....Anyway, had blurred lineart shading was blotchy, needing a crusty/runny nose, and patchy fur, OC was Dawnfeather, With a Tweak from Ivyheart. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a missing patch of fur on his shoulder? And blur the earpink a little. 16:31, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, I tried to copy the patchy fur from his elder... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 00:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

But, the linearts are facing opposite directions, Maple. Give it a shot and see what it looks like. 05:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-The friggin' blurred lineart....ugh... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 23:24, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart - fix that. 01:49 Thu Feb 16

Uhg, those patches look unrealistic, sorry. Can we just redo these and retweak the elder image? 14:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yes please. And I personally think this should be redone. The shading's still really blotchy, and honestly it'll be almost impossible to get completely fixed without redoing. 15:01, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to agree with Shelly and Paleh on this one. And since three leads agree, and it was reserved/posted before the new Tweak Process, you don't have to re-nominate it. 8D 19:20, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) - Redone
Okay, this was on the redo list for the shading, blotchy highlights, and the patches could be more realistic. OA was Mousetalon. Comments? 23:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

<3 this Twi! Just lighten up the white a little. 23:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the patches a little less wildly smeared? It looks a bit strange for a short furred cat. 23:42, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, are you still working on this? 19:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, can't. My computer's being stupid and it erased half of my files. 04:59, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over, then. 17:02, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid her again. 17:33, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading; she looks a bit flat. 21:09, February 18, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded 22:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle (E) ~ Redone
He was a triangular tabby. I wanted to try a classic tabby so until I get this one approved, I won'tt upload his rogue. OA was Night shine. Comments? 22:05, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look blocky, he needs some stripes at the base of his tai;, on his arms, and on his face, and the color looks off *grumbles* This was gonna be my little secret lol 22:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for stealing :P It's kinda hard to get the right color because the shading/highlights are super thick. 22:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him more brown instead of golden, since that's the default tabby color? 18:30, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:40, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripes a tad. 01:29, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think that a bit of smudging would fair better than blurring. 05:02, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow...I atually like the smuding I did o3o. 17:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

This will be a little hard to explain, but the tail smudges look like they're only in the middle, could you add smudges near the tail lineart as well? I'm sorry if this is not a helpful explanation. 20:26, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded That was perfectly understandable x3. Changes might not be showing yet. 12:25, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Changes are showing. 18:36, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Since the tail looks like it was smudged more than the rest of the body, smudge the body more? 19:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Would you ratehr have me do that, or remove a few smuge lines? I don't want to smudge it too much. 20:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Do what Moon suggested. The smudges are fine in the center of the tail, but towards the lineart, it's not smudged at all. 20:50, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Some of the smudges are hidden by the ruffled fur. 21:13, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

The tail looks more smudged than the body so smudge the body more. Blur the earpink too. Awesome job Silver ^^ 21:48, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are not showing  22:06, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) ~ Redone
Look up a rippled tabby and this is what you get. Also, the previous version was just a modified triangle tabby. I picked the color off an image of gold, but I might be willing to darken it a bit. I got permission to redo, OA is Hiddensun with tweaks/redos by Mintstarr and Icestorm. Comments? 23:35, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Nice. 8DDD 00:13, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Aww me wanted to do this :P Ah well, define the dapples and the earpink. 00:14, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty. ^^ Define the shading. 01:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. She also looks a little green to me... 20:24, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and she does look a little green. 00:43, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I was a bit afraid of getting too close to ginger, but I think this works out. 00:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Naaah, I think this looks perfectly golden. Could you blur the stripes just a tad though? They look very hard edged. 12:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 14:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading Sky Super pervetedness! 14:39, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) ~ Redone
Okay, it needed to match it's loner image, and it was pretty much impossible to tweak and get a fine result, so I ended up redoing it with permission. I did redo it, more of a tweak, on the same image, but I'll say it was redone, 'cause that's how it was except on the same image. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 00:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

His muzzle shouldn't be black, and make the earpink a bit more triangular. :P Sky To Kill An Empire 00:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the white on the chest paws and belly. 00:11, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the earpink by any chance? 01:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also redid the whole image because it didn't match the loner. 05:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Add the tufted ears ^^ 17:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 18:53, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt ~ (Alt.W2) ~ Tweaked
Highlights needed to be toned down. OA = Minstarr. 02:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the head? :3 02:22, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone the highlights down a bit more ^^ 02:30, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

They're fine, actually, they should possibly be defined. 02:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't see the new verson. '-_- Can you define the shading? 22:12, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on this. I'll do it now. 18:14, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:25, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 08:01, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 13:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Billystorm (W) ~ Redone
Woo~ I got him. Needed to be redone 'couse the stripes were just squiggly lines. OA was Dawnleaf. Don't tell me to change the earpink, 'cause that's how it is on a ginger cat. Comments for improvement? 02:25, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

<333 I love this! Lighten the white on the paws a little bit. 02:26, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. I love you Stoney <33333333 02:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. :) Can you make him look a bit more ginger than brown?? 02:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the color is fine. The color ginger varies greatly. 02:33, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Just to tell you, ginger isn't orange, it's orange-brownish. Please let changes show... 03:09, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

This is amazing. Can you redden the earpink just a leeetle moar? :3 03:40, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Do ya mind lightening the image? I looks kinda dark, but I don't think it's the shading this time. 05:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno if it's the shading or not, bur maybe try thinning the shading some? Sky Super pervetedness! 06:20, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it a little more orange? Not a whole lot, but just so it doesn't look so brown. 18:09, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. You might have to check the file history to see the changes. 19:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (KM) ~ Redone
Well... I was the OA, and she needed to match her prey hunter. Comments? 04:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

-wait- She needs mud. I'll add that in. 04:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

And a torn ear. I fail. 04:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes a bit, Leggo. 19:22, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

They should be more pointy as well. And the stripes on her tail go all the way around. 20:20, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just re-did her. I'm never making a charart at nine at night again. xD 16:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Add some mud :3 16:22, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate mud. x.x 20:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the mud a tad less greenish, 'cause it looks kinda green right now. 09:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Petalfall (D) ~ Redone
Wee hee 8DD Before any one says anything about the style, hear me out. I looked up rose pink off the internet and used those colors. Then I looked up cream cats and tried to find cats of a similar color. The ones I found were tabby/spotted like this. OA was Bramble and was redone/tweaked by mintstarr. Comments? 05:40, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sooooooooooo pretteh! Blur the edges of the shading a tad though. *steals* 05:44, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! <3 Sorry...but I looked for rose-creamy colored cats on the internet, and I didn't find any spotted tabbies. Plus, that isn't a spotted tabby, those are just some markings. Unless you can give the link to where you found spotted tabby rose-cream colored cats, then I'd suggest removing the markings. 05:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The one I went off of are here and here. 06:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Well in realistically all cream cats have tabby stripes I think, most are just really faint. Those ones are just more visible than most. So I don't think you really have to put them on. But if you do decide to keep them, blur them a bit. 14:59, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It depends on the shade if they have stripes or not. And shade is artists choice. 16:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading tons, unless it's ment to be like that. <3333333 02:07, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Blur the shadin. c: Sky Super pervetedness! 04:13, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Gosh darnit Sky it was close to 24 hours XD 04:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but this isn't a proper spotted tabby. You'll have to change that, because I can't tell if it's a tabby or not like this. 03:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I re-did the pelt since the stripes and base had to be on the same layer. You might need to look in the file history. 06:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Heres a stupid suggestion I have! How about making the stripes kinda fade out in some places(like on the chest)? I dunno, maybe not, Im just throwing out ideas since in the pictures the stripes are really light and kinda faded. Uh, sorry if I can't explain it right. 07:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the haunch shading. Looks great, Mounty! 09:09, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaler. -- Elork   17:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Stoney ^^ I gave her a cream chest, I think that's what you meant Bloo. 17:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Acorntail (D) - Redone
OA was Moonpelt. It was on the redo list. Comments? 23:52, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty Scarlet ^^ Define the tail shading. 00:01, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (R) ~ Redone
OA is Ashshadow, needed to match others. Comments? 00:39, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look less smudged on the other one. Also, it looks like something is running down from her ear. 20:56, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:28, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. Pretty! 8D 09:12, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (W) - Redone
OA was Dawnleaf. Needed to match her queen. 04:36, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is...so amazing *o* Blur the earpink. 04:45, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shut it, Mounty >.> 17:38, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MC) - Tweaked
OA was Shelly/Icestorm, and she needed her muzzle to match the apprentice charart. 8D 14:48, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make it looks more like her MC alt. 03:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. L) - Redone
In all technicality, I went through the tweaking process with this, but nothing was really left unchanged in the end, so this'll be called redone. XD OA was Moonflight and shading needed to be redone. 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the --> leg and haunch shading. 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

It may just be my computer, but, he looks tinted blue...o3o <3   19:02, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred it to the max. And yeah, the highlights are tinted blue cause white highlights look awful on black cats in my opinion. 19:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him tinted a little less blue and more black? Sorry, but it looks kinda odd. He's smexy otherwise, though<3 20:59, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading as it is looks fine, but I do think you could smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. <span style="">01:04 Sun Feb 19

It's not fine...he looks blue. Black and blue are two totally different colors. If anything, just make it so the highlighted areas don't look dark blue. =P 01:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think Paleh can choose if she wants to change it, but in the defense of blue-tinted highlights, they do look much better, and more natural than white highlights. It's not like the picture is Bluestar's kind of blue :P <span style="">01:15 Sun Feb 19

Reuploaded - Well since I still don't wanna put white highlights on him, I desaturated them a bit, but they're still blue tinted. Is this better? 03:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, much better. If he were any bluer, I'd have voted to have his name changed to Bluestar. XDDDD 03:38, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the pelt more into the ear? <span style="">03:59 Sun Feb 19

Frecklewish (A) - Redone
This is the exact same as the MCA except without the herbs. Not really anything to change.... *shrugs* OA was Scarlet. 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

It's Frecklewish, not Fracklewish, so I fixed that for you. I agree, there's nothing else to change. 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and I re-did the shading. 22:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, Cloudy! Define the lower back, hauch, and rump shading. 08:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 08:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) ~ Tweaked
Well, I haven't done a tweak in a while, so I thought I would just do a basic one. ;P So his shading was blotchy and needed to be redone, and it needed to be darker. 04:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a tad? 04:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Who's the OA? -winkwinknudgenudge- 04:30, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

...you just ripped the ear. Enlarge the earpink. 04:51, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry? Just because I ripped the ear doesn't mean I'm not entitled to some credit. And for the record, I also blurred the shading. Besides, I wasn't saying it just for myself, but for the actual OA of the image. 04:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anyways, darkened the shading and enlarged the earpink. OA was Sandstar12 with tweaks made by Bramble and Oblivion. ^^  05:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define haunch shading? c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Everyone likez teh cats  05:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W) - Tweaked
Just tweaked the muzzle and fixed the paw lineart (Mounty helped <3). OA's were Icestorm, Icy, and LeafstrikeAsakura. Comments? 04:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you fix the line on the muzzle so it doesn't go all the way across and looks more like her medicine cat image? 05:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, ignore that. xD  05:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)