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Jag (CG) ~ For Approval
Gosh, the mud was a challenge! I'm still not sure if i even did that well on it, but I tried. Ah well, I like challenges! I'm just gonna get this up before I ruin it more by fiddling. ^^; SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a bit. 03:33, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Can you fix the pupils a bit? They might just look weird on my screen but they look a bit off with them being pointed to the ground. This is super cute btw and you did great on the mud! 03:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eyes. And tysm, Echo. ^^ SquidwardPlays 03:54, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Is there a red or pink tint on the shading or something? It kind of sticks out, and I'm not sure if it goes well with the rest of Jag. Also, light source? Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There is the tint as Shadow said.. can you make the mud on the tail brighter? I can barely see it. Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:47, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Messed around with the mud on the tail a bit, is it any better? I also completely redid the shading. SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I can't see shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:01, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? SquidwardPlays 11:07, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Yes! This looks wonderful. The only thing I really see is the haunch shading looks kind of clumped in one spot, can you expand it to the belly and the bottom of the haunch more?  H A W K  F I R E  15:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I THINK I fixed the haunch shading. SquidwardPlays 11:19, November 4, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

add some more shading depth and darkness? it seems a lil flat. 00:27, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste outside the tail and front legs.Heyoitpotater (talk) 01:32, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Night (CG) - For Evaluation
This is probably an unpopular opinion but I enjoyed doing the mud. Also, yes, I'll fix the shading. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:19, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and smudge the mud a little bit. It looks kind of clump in some areas, like the front leg and the flank.  H A W K  F I R E  13:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups nvm I don't like mud now Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:02, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. And the mud needs to be smudged a tad more. And is it me, or does her eyes make her look like an ailen from space? You don't have to change the eyes by the way.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:06, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups that's meant to be eyelids, because eyes and earpink are my weak spots. Also the shading is now officially as dark as it can get. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 01:05, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink is now super dark on the right side and bright on the left side. Can you make them the same color?  H A W K  F I R E  03:42, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I think that's because the shading is covering the ear pink, Hawkey ^^ Regardless, could you add some more shading to the haunch and tail? I can see where you defined the shading on the face, chest, legs and stomach, but I can't see any shading on the haunch or tail. 15:37, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

My bad! Disregard my previous comment. ^^  H A W K  F I R E  19:00, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the lighter areas? I'm not seeing any here at all. ​​​​

Could you define the mud or maybe sharpen it? I'm having trouble seeing it. 02:42, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups oof Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:58, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 21:51, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 22:09, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the paws, tail and chest.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:18, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Alright, this may just be me, but I personally feel like the mud is now a little too intense, if that makes sense. I feel like it might've been sharpened up too much, and maybe could do with having less of the mud in general, but that's just what I think. If you think the mud's fine, you don't have to do a thing, since the thing about how bright/intense it is, could also just totally be my screen unless someone else sees it that way too. I just was thinking it so I thought I'd point it out. SquidwardPlays 02:37, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

^ I agree. I think it's a bit excessive on the head as well. The body mud is fine, but it's really bright and contrasts pretty bad on both my screens. Maybe making it a darker and less saturated will help. 23:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the earpink.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:18, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

I'll get on the mud, but can I have a second opinion on the shading? It looks quite defined on my screen. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 02:05, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups, got the mud to look more like her other images Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 02:29, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

can you blend the <-- earpink? it looks hard 19:39, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 01:31, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tip of the tail and paws and maybe the ---> side of the face 02:25, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Also I'm bumping ya up to an apprentice since this is more than 50% complete. ^^ 02:26, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the earpinkHeyoitpotater (talk) 02:59, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups plus sweet sweet approval Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:33, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - For Approval
all colors are the same, this one just lacks the excessive amount of shading his other images have, so it looks lighter. ​​​

Maybe define the face shading? I love this Malina457 (talk) 02:41, November 5, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Do you have a specific spot you'd like for me to define the shading? ​​

Adding to Malina's critique by asking you to define shading everywhere because I cannot see it.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:03, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Alright, maybe this'll work? Definitely not used to these blanks yet, but I really do like them... ​

might be nitpicky but I think there wouldn't be light on the chest with this source. or at least the there'd be shading where the chest fur lineart is if u get what I mean 21:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I still can't see shading except on the ears and tail, can you possibly add more mud.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:13, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I honestly think the amount of mud is good. I can see the shading fine too. Maybe it's your screen??

00:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Are the feet in shading? Other than that I love this Malina457 (talk) 17:03, November 8, 2018 (UTC)malina

Re-uploaded. I defined the feet shading and the area where David suggested. Sorry it took so long, work is hell. ​​

Define and/or expand the shading on the ---> front limb? 02:29, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Flaxkit (K) ~ For Approval


This is my first one! :D Queen 02:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC) Que enO fTh isSh ip

define shading, this also need renamed to File:Flaxkit.kit.png Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:27, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

To add on a little bit, I can see no shading at all myself, so try to define it as much as you can while it keeping it looking good. This part is just an idea to try if you think it might work, but maybe try darkening. SquidwardPlays 02:36, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

The shading should be darker now, if not, I'll have to see what I can do so that everyone can still see the design. The file name has been renamed. Anything else? Queen 02:42, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Que enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

The shading still needs defining and the file needs to be renamed Malina457 (talk) 03:43, November 6, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Although eye color is artist's choice, his eyes are looking gray-white.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:16, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Friendly reminder not to align your images ^^ 17:47, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I made his pelt color a bit lighter, so the shading should be more defined that way. His eyes are amber instead of blue and the file name should be renamed. Anything else? Queen 22:17, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

The shading still needs some defining and the eyes need to have black pupils Malina457 (talk) 23:28, November 6, 2018 (UTC)malina

Hopefully this is better ;-; Queen 23:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC) <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Define the shading on the neck and head. And when you upload, make sure you re-upload over File:Flaxkit.kit.png and not as a new image. When you're ready to upload, just go to his file that I linked and hit Upload a new version of this file and follow the prompts. That way there's only one image. It will also automatically show the current version everywhere. 00:16, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

What is the color of his eyes? They are still gray-white on my screen.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:21, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the earpink? it seems to blend in with the pelt a bit too much. Great job on your first charart!

21:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Are changes showing? His eyes are still gray-white. And I really don't think it's my tablet.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:52, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Have patience, Potato. They haven't reuploaded yet and it hasn't even been a full 24 hours since you last commented. 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

This has been told to you before, Potato. The kit blank only has 3 pixels for color. The eyes are fine. You can clearly tell what color they are. The blank is just small and a pain to work with in general. <span style="">15:36 Thu Nov 8

Okay, I think I was able to overwrite the photo on his file. And I can confirm that his eyes are NOT gray and white! I do hope this is version is better! Queen 21:56, November 8, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Those eyes are on point! :D I'm still not seeing any shading on the head. Also, define the light (meaning remove some of the shading) on the hind paw so it's not all covered in shading. I'm also gonna bump ya up to an apprentice, since this is more than 50% complete and this honestly looks amazing. 23:15, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for liking this! (I did practice a bit before entering in). Hopefully the shading on the head is fine now. I also played around to make the shading look like the "furred" texture, though it shouldn't mess with anything. Queen 00:09, November 9, 2018 (UTC) <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

You need to continue to upload over File:Flaxkit.kit.png. Right now the file is under File:Flaxkit.kit .png. Also, you need to swap some of your shading. The head and shoulder shading suggests the light is coming <--- that way, while the legs and haunch shading suggest the light is going --->. Please remove one half and flip it (I'd recommend swapping the head and shoulder shading to the right side instead of the left since that'd be the easiest imo). 02:18, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Alrighty! I do hope I uploaded the photo to the right file and I did do as you told me with the shading. Is there anything else you need me to fix? Queen 15:25, November 10, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Swap the --> front limb and the hind paw's shading to the other side to match the light source. Otherwise it looks good to me. 17:29, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Alrighty! After that, will he be uploaded to his page or? Queen 17:54, November 10, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

If no one else has anything to say in a day or so, then it will be put up for CBA (comments before approval) for 24 hours. If no one has anything to say then, it will be put on his page. ^^ 18:03, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Ahh. I gotcha. Now I do hope this the final edit lol. I have so many versions of this in my phone ;-; Then if you nothing to comment, then I put it on CBA or? Queen 19:16, November 10, 2018 (UTC)   <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

A senior warrior, such as myself, will put CBA in the heading when they deem it is ready to be on the page. 20:48, November 10, 2018 (UTC) Ahh, then do you think Flaxkit is done, or do I more editing to do? Queen 20:56, November 10, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Gullpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Assuming I'm allowed to have this up right now, here it is. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:41, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a lot please. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:43, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded hopefully I haven't under or over-defined the shading.<font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:41, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Would the shading on the back be there with the source your going with? <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:47, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did my best to get rid of the shading from the back. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:54, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Add some more shading on the lower chest, stomach, and --> side of the shoulder 00:10, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 12:20, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

define the shading on the tail, and there's also waste leaking from it. 00:21, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Feel like maybe I added too much shading onto the tail now, but not sure. i'll just reup it anyway. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 12:27, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define shading on both ears.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:25, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the ears seems pretty fine to me. If somebody else agrees that I should definite it, then I will though <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 08:19, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I think it could be defined just a little in the ---> ear. Also, the shading is leaking on the chest where it meets the shoulder. 23:09, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

With the current light source, the light needs to be defined on the tail, slightly on the chest, the < side of the < ear, and the back legs. 00:25, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Pigeonpaw (SC) (App) ~ For Approval
Hey look whos back and regressed too much. 🤮 22:47, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? Malina457 (talk) 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define and smooth shading, like Malina said. 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

There are some unfilled pixels on<-- that ear tip, can you fix that?Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:05, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's just the highlights on the pink ^^ 23:16, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading in <-- ear? On the front leg farthest from us there's a splotch of shading that looks a bit bold compared to the rest in the area, can you possibly blend it a little? Define the shading depth a bit on the shoulder. Lovely work!

23:39, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading and thanks Patch for the help! :D 00:13, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on <-- that hind pawHeyoitpotater (talk) 01:36, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the texture, especially on the shoulder Malina457 (talk) 03:53, November 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded 11:11, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading just a little more? I can see it, but I'm straining my eyes to see it. Except for the tail. The tail's good imo 23:17, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:24, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out on the > back leg some, there's just one darker patch that needs it - and also there's some waste floating out by the > ear 00:21, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:34, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Could you lighten the texture a tad, it seems really rough and its softer on the kit image, the shading on the lower back could be smoothenes quite a bit as well. It looks kinda blotchy to me. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 09:32, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

The texture on the shoulder still looks very criss crossy, it doesn't match with the rest of the texture. 20:34, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Violetshine (Q) - For Approval
all colors are from her other images, which I am the OA of and still have all of the .psd files. ​​

Is the lineart blurred on her right foreleg? You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   <span style="color:gold;font-family:Nothing You Could Do;font-size:18pt;text-shadow:darkslategray 2.5px 1.5px 1px;">patience.

Amazing as always, Jayce. Can you connect the black on the base of the tail to the booty lineart? 02:15, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Juniperclaw (D) - For Approval
I don't know guys...just the idea of Tigerheart/star contemplating about his new deputy and being like "yeah, Juniperclaw is as good as I'm gonna get" is really, really funny imo. 15:45, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

I know I was shocked that he was his choice lol. Lighten the ear pink a bit so that it's more visible.  H A W K  F I R E  18:17, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I removed some of the shading there. Hope this helps? 18:33, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

I love Juniperclaw Can you define the shading a bit more ? I can't see it too well on my screen. 20:35, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 20:45, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

It's a bit hard because it's a black cat, but I tried? 20:46, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

I can see it a little bit better, but can you define it more? Very Purdy.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:50, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

I think the shading is good now, I can see it very well.  H A W K  F I R E  22:56, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I managed to get it a bit darker. 23:02, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Snappaw (App) - For Evaluation
I can't tabby. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 01:47, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Add some more stripes. He's looking kinda bare compared to the kit. 02:14, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? ~Warriorct 02:17, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink on --> that ear blends in too well, can you define itHeyoitpotater (talk) 03:06, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups do you mean lighten the shading there, Potato? Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:34, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, lower the opacity.Heyoitpotater (talk) 19:12, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (D) - For Approval
First charart wooooooooo

02:05, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Not bad, Thunder! I'll make sure to add you as an apprentice. There's some waste outside the chest floof, below the hind ankle on the hind paw closest to us, and along the bottom of the tail. Several of your stripes (particularly on the tail, back and some of the legs) don't quite reach the lineart as well. And maybe expand the tail shading? 02:13, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Vec! I'm still getting used to all the tools and such so apologies if I miss anything.

03:26, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

There's still a few bits of waste floating around the character. And trust me, my screen isn't dirty.Heyoitpotater (talk) 05:42, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Yep, I second the waste comment. And add some facial shading, especially under the chin. Don't overdo it though. I also think there should be some more stripes in general, but not too many more.

Nice, Thunder!! The stripes on the front leg towards us should be more horizontal across the leg, looking at her other images. Right now the stripes are angled up towards the shoulder.  H A W K  F I R E  13:08, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the two front legs.Heyoitpotater (talk) 14:11, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

One of the toes on the hind foot closest to us isn't coloured in. ~Warriorct 18:51, November 10, 2018 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (Ghost) - For Approval
Will mess with the amount of freckles later. I have some studying to finish <span style="">19:12 Sat Nov 10

Could ypu define the shading on the face a bit. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  19:30, November 10, 2018 (UTC)