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Ravenpaw - Silver Nomination
Nothing to be said. Lightning talk 10:27, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Well, he was missing most of his citations so I copied them across from other pages and also used the new format. I've also checked the tenses and links, but I think some of the OS sections could be expanded - perhaps the ones where he was still a part of ThunderClan. -- Sandy star 12:28, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Could someone work on that? Echo star  Getting a tan 20:01, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I can look into Into the Wild, A Dangerous Path, and The Darkest Hour, but I don't have the other books. Is anyone else working on this? Echo star  Getting a tan 13:14, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

I can work on his Fire and Ice sections. Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   22:46, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

The Forest of Secrets section looks okay to me, but can more be added to Rising Storm? 08:37, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'll look into it; I recently bought the book. Echo star  Getting a tan 00:01, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blackstar- Silver Nomination
I have been working on his article for a while and he is almost complete. I added quotes and expanded his history. The only thing he needs is some work on his Twilight history. I don't have the book, could someone work on that. After that he is ready. Whitestorm17 17:16, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded his Twilight history. ♥Ice storm★  12:36, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Ice! :) 13:53, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

He looks ready to me. Echo star  Getting a tan 20:06, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand a few sections that are only a few lines long? Like his Sunrise section. 01:25, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

If you mean, the OS sections, he really didn't appear all that much when he was a rouge. Maybe The Sight could be expanded, but besides that he looks fine. If you want to expand The Sight, you can, as I don't own the book. 12:24, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'll expand The Sight. His OS sections won't be expanded more than they already are. 23:05, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ok thanks Moonflight! 00:18, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Excellent job Moonflight! He looks ready now! 21:51, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

His history looks good, but his eye color needs a citation or to be removed if it can't be cited, and his one bit of trivia needs a page number as well. 13:03, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I forgot to remove the amber eyes, but I searched through all his appearances throughout the books and it never mentions amber eyes, so I removed it. I also went through Dawn, and he was never described as an all black-tom, so I removed that as well. I think he is ready now. 13:38, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Fair enough; any other concerns before we vote? 13:48, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyspots- Silver Nomination
Well, I think he's ready, considering he only appears in one book. Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 17:35, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

He looks fine. Maybe add a quote? I'll do it in a few minutes. Oblivion Got it memorized?  00:05, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Done. I think he's ready now. Oblivion Got it memorized?  01:53, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for adding the quotes, Oblivion! Anyone else have any suggestions? Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 20:58, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Could we add a bit more detail about Tawnyspots in Forest of Secrets? I don't know if we can, since I don't have the book. Echo star  Getting a tan 11:47, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'll try and do it from memory. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  16:37, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Done. I hope that's enough. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  16:46, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good, thanks Oblivion! Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 17:18, July 30, 2010 (UTC)

You're welcome :) Does anyone else have any suggestions? Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  00:35, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job, Oblivion! Tawnyspots looks ready to me. Echo star  Getting a tan 00:02, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed up some tenses in his article but otherwise he looks great. Comments before the vote? 13:48, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) - Silver Nomination
I would like to nominate Ashfur for Silver. I found his father (Whitestorm) and added it to his charcat template and family member. Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 20:31, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

What Ashfur is this Tawny? ThunderClan or ShadowClan. :) Shruggy talk 22:52, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm assuming she means TC. But Tawny, where did you find out Whitestorm was his father? The Warriors website information is false. If you can find it mentioned in a book or from the author's mouth, then that would be enough. Oblivion Got it memorized?  23:07, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

ThunderClan, I'm sorry. I saw it on the warriors website, I didn't know that it was false information. I'll delete Whitestorm as his father if no one else has. Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 01:52, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's already been done. To avoid confusion, when linking Ashfur, link to Ashfur (TC)'s page, not just Ashfur. It was changed already, but that's just in the future for you. Oblivion Got it memorized?  02:14, July 20, 2010 (UTC)


 * Smokekit and Mottlekit? Are they real? I don't remember any name given for the two dead siblings, however Smokekit has a book reference... -- Sandy star 07:00, July 20, 2010 (UTC)


 * None of Brindleface's kits were named in the books until either Forest of Secrets or Rising Storm. And that reference is just to the page where it tells us that she has four kits. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 07:07, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Who added that he was "plump"? I personally don't think that this should be on the article if it was mentioned a long time ago. He could have easily lost the weight by now. Oblivion Got it memorized?  11:04, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

I added the TC link, and I'll delete the plump part. Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 13:48, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Was it confirmed that Sandstorm is Ashfur and Ferncloud's half-sister? It was never confirmed that Redtail wasn't Ferncloud and Ashfur's father. Echo star  Getting a tan 11:49, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Also, Rising Storm could be expanded, as well as most of the NP sections. I'll see what I can do about that. Echo star  Getting a tan 11:53, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

I've expanded his Midnight section; I can do Moonrise and Starlight as well, but I do not own Rising Storm or any of the other NP books. Could someone look into that? Echo star  Getting a tan 13:00, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'll expand as much as I can (sorry I wasn't on as much before) Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 13:33, August 1, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded as MUCH of Rising Storm that I could, but I had to memorize his apperances from the book, because I was at the library today and I don't own Rising Storm. But I expanded Twilight. Anything else that should be done? Earth bender Tawny Style! 23:07, August 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, can I withdraw this? It seems that no one else seems to be taking part in it Tawny is here... 23:04, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm... do you mean you want to remove this nomination from the page? 02:51, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Well, can you withdraw this? I think it's still silver quality, but I wish to remove this nomination from this page..... Earth bender Tawny Style! 15:44, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Hailstar- Silver Nomination
I think he's ready. Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 21:03, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. His history is very expanded for such a minor character. Oblivion Fly my pretties, fly...  21:06, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Code of the Clans could be expanded some. I'll look into it. Echo star  Getting a tan 11:59, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded it as much as I could. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  15:50, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Oblivion, looks like you beat me to it! Hailstar looks ready now. Echo star  Getting a tan 13:01, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks :D Anyone else have any more suggestions for Hailstar? Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  00:36, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's almost ready, but he could use a couple of quotes from Battles ''of the Clans. ''I'll add those now.  Moon flight Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  01:38, August 11, 2010 (UTC)'''

Done. Now he has my full vote. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  02:04, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Moonflight :) 20:22, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mossheart - Silver Nomination
Her article just needs a few citations and a quote, and it will be good to go to me! W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   02:36, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

She looks really good! She's definitely ready. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  11:10, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, she looks ready. ♥Ice storm★  14:36, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

She looks fine to me. Echo star  Getting a tan 12:00, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. She has my vote. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  00:38, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think she's ready! River pelt Deputy of StormClan 16:10, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm- Silver Nomination
I have been working on her article over the past few weeks and I think she is ready. 21:33, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Long Shadows could be expanded. I'll look into it. Echo star  Getting a tan 12:15, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Great job Echo! It looks great! I think she is ready now. 14:49, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Me too, she has my vote. Echo star  Getting a tan 13:15, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think she'll be ready once her SkyClan's Destiny section is added. I haven't read the book yet, but I assume she is only mentioned. Am I correct? If so, someone should look into that. Other than that, she has my vote. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  00:40, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for bringing that to attention, Moonflight. Can someone with the book work on that? I would but I don't own SkyClan's Destiny. Thanks! 01:10, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'll be getting SkyClan's Destiny on the 16th of August, unless someone could work on it until then. I'm sure there won't be much to write. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  01:30, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I doubt if this will be ready to be put up for vote before then. ;) 02:03, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like someone already put it up, and you were right Moonflight she was only mentioned. 11:34, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, that was me :D I didn't realize she was being nominated when I did it, though. 20:23, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, Lol! Thanks Oblivion! 23:34, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother- Silver Nomination
All of her history is in place; all I had to do was fix a couple links. She seems ready to me. Echo star  Getting a tan 14:31, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

I changed Leafstar's status to unknown. I agree that she is ready. 15:02, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

She needs a family tree, then she'll be ready. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  19:07, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

I doubt there has been one made since there are only two members of the family that we know of. Which brings up another point, do we really need a tree since Leafstar is the only member of the family we have a name for? There are only two people and only one is named. It seems unessecary for me, but that is just my opinion. 20:32, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... makes sense. It'd just be

Unknown-Unknown



Leafstar

I changed my mind. She doesn't need one XP Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  20:36, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

There isn't really anything else to add, I don't think. Any other comments or suggestions? I think she's ready. Echo star  Getting a tan 20:45, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

I am supporting! 21:26, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good to me. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  11:06, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed. ♥Ice storm★  14:10, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't Billystorm her mate now? I mean if you've read SkyClan's DestinyWillow pool "Let's look for donuts in the wilderness!"  01:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Not Leafstar. We are currently talking about Leafstar's mother. •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 15:21, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Im new but I agree that she is ready, and doesnt need a family tree. ^^ Shadowstar 01:00, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

What I said earlier; that wasn't supposed to be there. Oops :P. Otherwise I say the article is fine. Willow <font color="Lime">pool "Let's look for donuts in the wilderness!"  23:19, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Kestrelwing - Silver Nomination
I think he's ready. What do you think? Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  02:12, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. 19:25, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I looked over it very carefully and I cant find much that needs work, I support!!! ^^ Shadowstar 00:56, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudspots - Silver Nomination
I think he's ready. For a minor character, there's not much more to add. Do you all agree? Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  02:09, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I was just about to suggest that LOL... Yeah I support!!!!! Shadowstar 13:37, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. I also promoted him to bronze status because he was only on started status. 15:03, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Whitestorm. I meant to do that, but never got to it. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  01:28, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Your welcome. :) 02:05, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Archeye - Silver Nomination
I think Archeye is ready for a Silver nomination ive looked it over and I dont think you can add any more for a minor character. Agreed? Shadowstar 01:01, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Nice job for a first nomination. :) Moon  flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  01:26, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Moonflight Friends? Shadowstar 01:39, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed. There isn't much to his article but it still looks good. I also promoted his status to bronze, which seems to be my job around here. ;) 02:10, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry guys, he's already silver. 18:26, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

How did that happen? Did a vandal have the status changed back to started or something? When I saw it, he was on started. 18:52, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it was ever placed. Vote. 18:57, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh ok, they just forgot to change it. Thanks for clearing that up, Maple. And sorry Shadowshine, that it was already silver. 00:16, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ashfur (SC)- Silver Nomination
He only appears in one book, and I think we've got that covered. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 15:56, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

His article looks really good! He deserves Silver. 16:07, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

My only problem with him is his Rising Storm section. Did it really say he died from the sickness or was that just an assumption? If it was just a guess we need to say he was just listed in the allegiances, but he wan't listed in ''A Dangerous Path. ''Then say, that he most likely died from the sickness from the Carrionplace. Besides that, he looks good. 18:57, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Maple! He looks fine now. Supporting. 00:12, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Onion - Silver Nomination
I basically did her whole article myself: added eye colour cite, history, and quotes. I think she deserves silver. 23:46, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting!! Good work by the way!! Shadowstar and Blueshine 23:48, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

She has my vote. 23:57, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. 01:13, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I just realized she appeared during the battle with Dodge. I added it. Now she's ready :) 17:26, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Seedpelt- Silver Nomination
When I came across the article it was already pretty good. All I did was add quotes and expand history. She is ready. 00:14, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. I escpecially liked that second quote you added XP 00:23, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed. Haha me to :3 Shadowstar and Blueshine 00:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

She's ready. 01:13, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I was so excited when I found that quote. I was like, "this is perfect!" Hahaha 01:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Billystorm - Silver Nomination
His history is well expanded. He has a quote, and references. I'm looking into SD and finding more quotes. But right now, it's fine to me. 01:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. 01:49, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

HIs history looks good, but you are right he needs probably at least two more quotes, if possible. I also moved his status from started to bronze. 02:04, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I can do that. 02:15, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, done. I hope the quotes are okay. I also added his history in the manga adventure at the back. 02:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

He looks fine. Supporting. 11:25, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Pad - Silver Nomination
I have no idea if I'm doing this right, but I'd like to nominate Pad for silver. 雨晶須 夏天來了! 02:13, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

His description needs to be cited, and if possible could he have some quotes? I wouldn't know because I don't own the book. Also, if possible could the history be expanded. 11:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I cited his description (using the Browse Inside), but I don't own the book, so I can't add quotes. Could someone else help? Rain whisker  00:23, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

His history and description look good. But, the quotes are still an issue. Like Blackclaw said, can someone that owns the book help? 02:23, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't own it. I'd help if I could. 02:25, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I own a copy but im not sure where it is at the moment when or if I find it I will add some. 18:14, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ok Thanks Shadowshine. 18:26, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oakheart- Silver Nomination
I expanded his history, added quotes, cited, and fixed up his Charcat. Comments? 16:16, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good! On his charcat, I changed "kits" to "son" and "daughters". I also moved the Endspoiler to before the references, but that doesn't really matter XP 16:31, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. 17:51, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok thanks Oblivion! 18:50, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Barkface -- Silver Nomination
I looked over everything, and it seems good enough. Opinions? 20:22, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

The Darkest Hour, Sunset, and The Sight could all be expanded. Also, if possible he could use another quote or two. He's been much mor imprpved since last time, though. 20:29, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Dovepaw - Silver Nomination
I think she's ready for silver, I added a couple quotes to her page, and the info of her in the books seems to be sumed up pretty good. River pelt Deputy of StormClan 01:18, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I am supporting. Excellent work Riverpelt! Well done! 01:45, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Whitestorm! River pelt Deputy of StormClan 14:18, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Joining
Hi. I heard of this project mainly from Whitestorm17 and I want to join. can I? <font color="981f1f" style="background:Gold">Breezestar <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> Only a Breeze... 01:51, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, I have added you in. Welcome to the project! If you are having trouble getting started feel free to ask any of the longer-time members or read the FAQ or this editing tutorial. 13:35, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleclaw - Gold Nomination
His article looks really good to me, and he's been featured. I think he's ready for gold. 18:42, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, he does look good, but I found some things that could be worked on. His whole description is just cited as "Forest of Secrets", and that's all it says, it needs to have a page number, and I doubt that all of his description was revealed then. Also, his Moonrise and Eclipse sections could be expanded, besides that he looks okay. 18:53, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

All of the sections could be expanded a lot-- 18:56, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

All of the sections? I mean, most of his history is pretty expanded. 19:00, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

In my opinion, the article shouldn't qualify even for silver, let alone for gold. History sections need major expansion, mainly the New Prophecy, which consist only of a couple of lines even though he was a main character. Description needs exact citation (I doubt he was described in Forest of Secrets as "broad-shouldered and muscular", as he was a newborn kit then). More quotes (and more relevant ones) need to be added, especially from the New Prophecy. 19:22, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I guess he does need some work... mainly The New Prophecy, since he actually had a point of view then. 20:34, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I can do only Midnight and Moonrise, because that's the only NP books I have, but I can work on it. 21:19, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps I could look for a few quotes. 00:08, August 23, 2010 (UTC)