Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Swallowtail (RC) (E) - Redone
I have permision now, don't worry :). Original artist was Bramble, shading needed tweaking and stripes needed to match the warriors :D . Comments?  Elorisa   19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the smudges :3 20:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I personally like the smudges. The make him look furry, which is brilliant to me. I think you should just enlarge the ear-pink a bit. 20:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like the smudges too, Shellheart. They're just a little sharp. 21:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say leave 'em as they are. They look good to me :3 23:55 Sun Oct 23

Reuploaded~better?  Elorisa   02:02, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the reddish parts on her haunch and her leg? 17:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the ear-pink curve round more at the top. 08:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I didn't see any reddish parts...:/  Elorisa   20:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights looks blotchy. 22:52, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I redid it..again xD. The shading was wonky and icky, so I fixed it *throws confetti* comments? :3.  Elorisa   15:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a little green to me... Maybe darken her a little? 15:51, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink and blur the shading a tad -Guradian 01:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and darken the stripes to match her warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:35, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Elorisa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:54, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur her spots more. 20:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:58, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh how I love xcf. files >:3 22:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little too dark, or too yellow. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 00:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I took all the colors from her leader image.... 00:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure you took them from the right spots of the image though. The spots look a little green... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail needs highlights. 22:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are not mandatory. 04:00, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think what you meant to say, Dapplecloud, was that the tail needs an area where there isn't any shading. Am I correct? 06:13 Fri Oct 28

Reuploaded Eh... -- 20:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful. Make the earpink slightly more pink. 01:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her front legs. 12:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 14:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image needs to be lightened to match her other images. And I know highlights aren't mandatory USUALLY, but the other images all have highlights. Should this on have them too so they match? Unless you can match the 'shiny' look without highlights. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

And also move the three stripes up a bit to match the other images. 17:40, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink so that it matches her other images. 19:56, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Snowy? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 20:01, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Q) - Tweaked
Orginal artist was Hawkfire, shading and highlights needed tweaking. Comments? Elorisa  19:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The muzzle looks white because of the highlight, could you please fix that. And it looks like there's blurred lineart now. It wasn't listed for that I know, but I don't remember it being there before you tweaked it, so I think you should fix it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really odd and blotchy to me... I don't know. 15:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''tried blurring and tweaking the shading... :/  Elorisa   15:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred a lot. Try what you can, and if you have to, maybe you can redo it. 18:00, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks blurred still, and the muzzle still looks white. 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:39, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It looks blotchy. 01:40, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:32, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (W)~ Redone
OA was Nightshine and it needed to be brown and nobody likes triangle tabbies so heres this. 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot more, especially around the highlights (if you use them, of course) Guradian1098 01:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks pinkish-cream, not brown. 02:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

At least tint the base color to be more brown. 03:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ear farest from us. and her base coat looks gray, make the base coat match her elder. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't need to change it to match Oblivion's; she posted first, so Oblivion's should match hers. Lighten the shading a tad. 00:59 Sun Oct 30

As I suggested below, she should talk it over with Oblivion, and see what should be done. It shouldn't just be "Oh, she posted first" sort of thing. It's not fair to either artist. 23:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I've left Iceheart a message on her talk page. Now it's just a matter of waiting until she replies :3 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- sorry guys ive been crazy busy. 01:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She still needs to be more brown. This looks cream. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:31, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Redone
The next one on her lineup. Redone to match the MC. Comments? 00:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the artist before you? And maybe add some more stripes so it matches the medicine cat image .Blur the ear pink, too Guradian1098 01:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I don't know and tbh I don't care. I can't add anymore stripes because I don't know where to put them, but I will blur the ear pink. 01:17, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It took me a few seconds to look up the OA of this image. 02:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, I'm not you, and for your information, this project is concerned for the welfare of images and not for OAs. 02:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Icestorm, it's not that big of a deal and I thought we were supposed to say the OA anyway? Lighten the shading on her flank a tad. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Does it really matter who the OA is? Sometimes, it's hard to tell, 'cause most of these were moved from other file names. 02:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have shading on the flank. Do you mean the midriff? 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Flank = the area where your kidneys are. Judging by its location in a human, as well as Brackenfur's scar, I'd say it's where the shading is too dark. 02:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ohfail. I was thinking the My Little Pony flanks...where they have their cutie marks...yeahsorry XD 02:54, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink a bit. 19:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there's some smudged lineart on the tail; fix that. 06:09 Sun Oct 30

Re-Uploaded: Lightened shading on flank, blurred back shading, blurred earpink. Where is the smudged lineart? The lineart is perfectly fine. 14:29, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there waste all around the image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not. There is waste all around it. 16:49, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 10:14 Mon Oct 31

And blur the ear-pink too. 17:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Icey, you still working on this? 18:08, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (E) - Redone
Eh, not too sure about this one... Should I change the stripes to match her warrior? I'm terrible at that tabby style, though ;_; 11:40, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I really love these stripes you did, though... Anyway, define the earpink a lot. 14:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This style of ear-pink looks good only on the leader charart, made it different. Leaf-storm,15:57,October 29,2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. 16:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like this style of ear pink. Less hassle. xD Blur the shading. 17:58, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like it too :P Blur the shading on the hindquarters, I love this image by the way! 18:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.' 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you change this so that it matches Iceheart's image? She was the first to post it, so it should match hers. 00:54 Sun Oct 30

I'm fine with changing the stripes, but I'm hesitant to change the colour. Personally - with absolutely no offence at all to Iceheart - I think the shade of brown in this image is more suitable. People have even been asking Iceheart to change her colour to make it more brown. I'm open to suggestions, though. 02:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, both images' color need to be changed. Iceheart's needs to be more brown, and I think this needs to be a little less pink/red. could you fix that? And honestly, though Icy's image is gorgeous, I like these stripes better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:13, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

No offense to Iceheart, but I like this style of stripes better. I think both of you should talk it out and see which one you like better. 17:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change this to match mine? Technically you shouldnt even be doing this but one exception to the rule isnt a huge deal. Still its my pattern well go with 00:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Must you really be so mean about it? She already said she would change it. 00:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur (Ki) - Redone
I guess it's okay to put this up, since it was on the make-overs list. Original artist was Icethroat, and it needed to be longhaired and match the warrior image. 22:44, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a little more. Pretty! 03:59, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:38, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and it'll be perfect :3 23:04 Wed Nov 2

Reuploaded 01:28, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Jag (CG) - Redone
Yay a cave-guard! OA was Grayravenpaw. The mud needed to be smudged, there was blurred lineart in many places, the shading needed fixed, and I also noticed that his description says that he is dark gray, which before, he was not. I hope it's ok that I did a new color for it (if need be I can tweak the loner too, or if it's not ok I'll put it back to it's original color). The dark gray color is like Crowfeather's. Comments for improvement? 21:26, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

OH, I almost forgot, it was indeed listed to be redone. Sorry! 23:25, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/ smudge the mud into the pelt more, and make the earpink smaller - 03:58, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and lighten the mottles on the mud. This is great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:52, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? 00:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. This is lovely. 02:36 Thu Nov 3

Blur the earpink and the mud a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:14, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:07, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (Ki) - Redone
Needed to match the warrior :3 OA was Mumble, and was tweaked by Iceheart. Comments? 23:07 Tue Nov 1

Cuuuuute! Make the nose dark gray/black though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:12, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the whole thing, it seems a bit lighter than his warrior image. Good job! 19:50, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :3 22:52 Wed Nov 2

Nightstar (L) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be thickened and blurred, and I made the eyes amber instead of brown, though that wasn't listed, since it wasn't natural. Hard to tell who the OA was, but I THINK it was Mumble785. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:55, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and changes aren't showing yet. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:56, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading alot more; he was described glossy, yes? Guradian 03:59, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading's dark enough, but yes he was described as glossy. Should I add a layer of highlights over this then? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:48, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added a layer of highlights over it to make him look glossy. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (K) - Redone
OA was Echostar229, Tweaked by Moonleaf, Wildheart, and Iceheart, I think... Since I already tweaked her warrior and queen charart, I figured that I should just finish, besides it was supposed to be lighter. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:57, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you brighten the eyes a bit? And make the white pixel pure white? It doesn't really look like it is right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (CG) - Redone
OA was Hiddensun. It needed to be brown-gray and was on the redo list. Comments? 03:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, the stripes look hard-edged. Blur them, please. Beautiful image, by the way ^^ -Guradian04:06, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Didn't Dapplecloud reserve her elder version already?... 21:47, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, dang it, she did. I'll ask her if I can have it since I already put this up, but I'm fine if it gets declined. 22:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ruby (KP) - Redone
I saw the shadings need blurring, I was thinking that I can only tweak but when I looked on it on my computer i saw that whole lineart is blurred. I take the base colour from it, other are new. OA is, I think MosspathOfSkyClan, Leaf-storm,13:25,November 2,2011 (UTC)

Was this on the list? And did you get permission to redo her? 19:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She also needs a black/dark grey nose. Sky- Gathering the army of  Trolls 22:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think Leaf's okay with this one. Blurred lineart is a pain in the butt to fix. xD 00:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I tryied fix it but i only made it worse, dark nose, yes here it is Leaf-storm,19:10,November 3,2011 (UTC)

Whitetail (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar tweaked by Darkhallows and the shading needed completely redoing (it was pink). I know the original image was long-haired, but we had this discussion with Firestar and thick fur doesn't represent length. Although I'm fine with changing it back to long-haired. 16:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

The image looks a bit distorted for some reason. Not sure if you have the wrong file size or if it's just the page. Also, this needs to have been on the tweak page before being redone. Sorry to pry, it's just the rule. Ah, nevermind, found it. But I honestly think she was fine as a long haired cat. I know thick doesn't always equate to long, but with her I think it did. Your choice, though. 21:34, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

You'd have total freedom if she had only one image, but unfortunately she doesn't. If you change yours to short haired, then it's just more work for the rest of the project to change her other two images to short haired. Could you change it back to longhaired please? 22:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded No worries XD 22:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lily (KP) - Redone
She needed to match the colours and markings of her sister. OA was Nightfall. Comments? 22:00, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading. 01:25 Thu Nov 3

Re-uploaded. 01:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 19:24, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Sweetpaw (K) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine, and the tortoiseshell patches and shading needed to be redone, and I have Scarletwind's permission. Yes, I know this is my declined version of Spottedpelt, and its not being used, so I can use it. Tortoiseshell and white is the same as white with tortie patches, and Sweetpaw has been mentioned as a regular tortoiseshell. 23:51, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

This has to match her apprentice version, does it not? 00:00, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well her apprentice version is going to be redone too when i finish the blanks. This needs to have more white. Shes white with tortoisshell patches not tortoiseshell with white patches. 00:40, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Plus, when we redo images, we need to keep them similar to the approved image; not exactly her kit but more like her apprentice anyway. Yeah you can change it around somewhat but not this drastic, sorry. 01:47, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Flora (Ro) - Tweaked
Original artist is Minnowclaw/Swallowtip and shading needed to be thicker... 01:19, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to make the earpink less pink? Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 03:40, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine. She was listed to be redone since her chaart depicted her as brown, and she was supposed to be dark red. Her colors come from a darkened Foxleap (including earpink). Stripes were kept almost identical, except I added some extra thin stripes and altered a few. I have a feeling this image may be a tad dark, what do you think? Comments for improvement? 01:41, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah lighten it a tad. Otherwise: fantastic job <3 I am in awe of your skill. <span style="">01:44 Thu Nov 3

It looks a little... violet. I don't know if it's my screen or not, but maybe make it more red-brown? x3 01:47, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Who cares what color it looks? XD It's neat looking. Blur the ear pink. 01:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded And honestly, there is actually no such thing as a dark red cat, it's either brown or ginger. I tried my best to get it to a realistic color while keeping her a dark red color. Unless someone can show me a real dark red cat, then I'll borrow colors off that then =)  01:51, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say tweak the color balance and make it more like a very dark ginger. That, or take it very literally and make it look like my personal charart. ;) 01:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lol ignore my last comment. That totally soared over my head. 01:59, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Also, upon googling "dark red tabby" I got a bunch of cats that look like <- that. See it as you will, I think this is what they meant by it. 02:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah that's what I found, too. I adore this image, but to be accurate, maybe you should change it. <span style="">02:35 Thu Nov 3

Reuploaded How's this? 20:37, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

once again, reuploaded. She looked brown, and dog goneit I just realized the bg got colored :l  20:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (L) - Tweaked.
Tearing of the ear. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 02:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

OA? And if you only tore the ear, then why is this redone? Perhaps thicken the lineart to match with the surrounding lineart. 02:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. OOPS. Sorry. I meant tweaked. XD OA is either Mistystar139, Iceheart, or Sandwich989. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 03:01, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is only meant to be tweaked to tear the ear...but can you please blur the shading? It's bothering me.... 04:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried...<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 20:03, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the torn lineart on --> side towards the tip. 20:04, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 20:08, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing (TC) (Q) ~ Redone
Redone to match warrior. OA is Echomist. 04:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I am NOT changing the color on her chest. That's the same shade as the warrior, and anything else makes it look odd.. 04:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! Could you lighten up the brown on the chest though? It seems a bit darker than her warrior image, though it's probably just cause of the shading or something. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:10, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

It's just the shading. Everything is the same color as the warrior image. 06:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D) - Redone
Ok, so first of all, he needed to match his warrior image, second of all, he needed to be dark brown not light brown (and I'll do all his images for that, don't worry) and third, he needed a mackerel striped tail. I tried to copy the tail stripes on a picture of one, but I don't know if it's very accurate. :P I also tried to copy Icestorm's stripes best I could, since he was described as having the same kind of tabby stripes as Brambleclaw and Tigerstar. Anyways, OA was Nightshine I believe. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:09, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a tad. He looks smexy<3 16:19, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Duh, Cloudskye. He is Hawksexy ;3 Could you blur the stripes at the base of the tail a little bit? They look a little too hard-edged. 20:03, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Bleh, he's overrated. Anyways, blur the stripes a tad. 20:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hareflight (W) - Tweaked
She looks prettier now. Original artist was Hiddensun, and there needed to be shading. Comments? 20:27, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Poppydawn (E) - Redone
Original artist was Dawnfeather, and she needed to be dark red. I took her colors from the warrior image. ;3 21:18, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't Ivystripe supposed to do this? Oh well, I think it's okay for now. Anyways, there's some waste on one of the tufts on her back. 21:21, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

And on the back of the head, too. 21:22, November 3, 2011 (UTC)