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Cloversplash (W) - CBA
Comments? I love that clover leaf. 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

She's dark brown, I'm v sure the splash should be clover shaped. It should probably match what the old one shows.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading needs to be smoothed out around the chest/legs and there is a bit of waste by the tail 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It says shaped like a clover leaf, not a clover itself. I'll fix the base and shading tomorrow *decides to steal Loudbellys coloring*. 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

a clover leaf is a clover lmfao, either way it should resemble the shape of a clover. Shouldn't the coloring match the old one???  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with mink :/

04:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't the clover technically the whole plant, and then a clover leaf is an individual leaf? I'm not sure, but Potato might have a point. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

no, lmao. the shape on the muzzle doesn't even resemble clover leaf, I said that this should match the colors and design of the old one  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:59, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I know what you were saying, I was only arguing about the "clover leaf isn't a full clover" thing. Anywho, Potato I think there's waste on the actual lineart of the tail, as well as near it like Ty pointed out. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  05:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

didnt we aree that all iamges should match the old one or whatever 12:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

If that's true, I'm fixing it right now. 13:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded So I googled a clover leaf and what I got was a full clover, so I matched it to best of my ability. 13:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to be the unpopular one here, but I think Potato and Jose were actually correct. It should be one of the leaves, not the entire plant. It explicitly says "a clover leaf", and if you look it up... you get things like a three or four leaf clover, meaning that a "clover leaf" is singular. You were correct in your statements, Potato and Jose. Please go and change the marking back to how you had it, but perhaps shrink it just a little bit. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded  16:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

It says that the white flash is on her nose, and this looks like it's on her forehead. Could you move it down so it touches the top of the nose? Also, can you curve the haunch shading to match its shape? 16:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the shape wider and kind of heart shaped. These are clover leaves for reference. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded me tries  16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

You could do something like this maybe. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:48, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch shading  Ellie  life is an illusion 19:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded arghhh  19:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you also define the ear pink? i cant really see it espeically on the < ear  Ellie  life is an illusion 20:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There should be light on the legs with this source  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:16, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The source is fine- this was used on two other images. See below. 13:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

While this source has been used, those other images have a lot more depth on the front legs so they're not all flat; if you could do that some, that'd be great.

Reuploaded  23:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears very blotchy on the haunch. Could you please smooth it, along with on the front leg closest to us? 23:25, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate the haunch shading  00:28, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail - just a little bit, and maybe extend the shading on the back leg so it reaches <<- that way more? This looks amazing, Potato!

Reuploaded thanks! 00:43, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on both legs and the tail could stand to be smoothed more. There's also waste by <- that ear. 14:18, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:13, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth of the eye color and smooth the haunch shading

Reuploaded *internally screams at haunch shading*  01:35, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the light on the legs, or fix the way it transitions from the top. It seems abrupt to cover the whole legs instead of equally transitioning. So maybe smoothen the top part up and add just a tad of light to them <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:23, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't want to define the light on the front leg farthest from us much more or the chest shading is going to look weird. 22:26, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:59, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to break, but I do still think the haunch shading is sharp - minimal chance has occurred, and the more hidden back paw would be completely in shadow with this source, not in half. I also believe the facial shading should come out to cup the chin to avoid flatness, and it's leaking away from the lineart on the belly and < ear. To earlier comments, I believe the shading on the < front leg needs to stretch higher on one side only, because it kinda just cuts off at an awkward place with minimal taper

Reuploaded New shading, new source. I like this one better. 16:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Better yeah. I'd fill in this spot with shading; theres a bit of a gap between the chin and shading on the > side of the cat which seems out of place. I also think the haunch shading could be smoothed slightly, and you've got waste around the paws

Reuploaded  17:46, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

The haunch shading seems to have gotten sharper this revision, truthfully, try smoothing that again, and a bit on the < front arm?

I'll reup later, but just so you know there's been a power outage where I live, so my comp doesn't work. -- 19:49, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:32, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could I request an image link (vvcap, etc), to see the changes? Perhaps there might be a glitch or whatnot, but there are no changes in the last upload as seen in the wiki's revision history. It's still just as sharp as before, and I did zoom to check.

Reuploaded I saved the file wrong. Maybe this shall help? Darn shading. 22:10, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

It's fine now yeah. CBA?

Blackstar (K) - CBA
I don't think the back paw farthest from us would be showing, so I didn't add it. Anywho, comments? 13:52, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the black paws a bit more? 16:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waster, and it looks almost like there's a gap in the haunch shading. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 16:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the gap in the haunch shading is intentional, Baykit's source has the same gap. 16:43, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little overall. 18:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

The black on the hindleg needs to be higher. As his others show it about just about a bit of his ankle wise so both would almost cover his back paws completely.<span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:18, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a patch of shading leaking onto < side of the haunch. 22:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Its leaking on the stomach too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:44, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading

12:24, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:03, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:48, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:27, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Same comments as on Bluebellkit, and also smooth the tail shading

Reuploaded redid shading  22:31, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you taper the <--- end of the haunch shading so it doesn't end in a bulk? 23:06, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:14, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Same as the other <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:19, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the haunch <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:01, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Not breaking CBA, but there's waste above the ears, below the elbow, and right of the rear  01:21, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

It's gone now. 01:26, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I apologize for breaking CBA, but the haunch shading appears blotchy - can you smooth that so it's consistent with the rest? There's a small spot by the base of the tail that lacks shading and appears off, can you fill that in? The shading on the arm, flank, and tail could stand the be smoothed, those areas look bold compared with the rest. Just smooth the edges a bit so it's more gradient, but doesn't end up losing the depth it has. Black on the front paw looks a little soft, can you make that a just a tad  sharper? The earpink on his other images is more saturated than what you have here - can you fix that? There is also a tiny spot of waste by the hindleg farthest from us. 01:51, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded darn tail on this blank  02:12, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the black should extend further on the black paws; comparing to the deputy, it shows that the whole bottomside is black of the elongated foot shown, and then most of the top. I also think a little black would show on the other back paw as well.

Looks better. I think you forgot to saturate the ears^^ 02:20, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I did Patch, it may be hard to tell because of the shading. 04:25, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded just let me know if you want the paws to be extended more or the earpink to be saturated. 16:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I do think the more visible back paw would be completely filled in, while the other > one needs it to just go and cup the heel. I also believe the nosepink needs to be darker to match the other images.

Reuploaded  17:52, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

That bit, which is on the more visible leg, needs to be filled still. I also believe a small bit of touch-up work could be done to the paw black, just so the edges aren't quite so hard compared to the blurred center. A little bit more of darker eye depth to match the other images might do some benefit, and darkening the shading on all of the black bits might help make those parts more visible

Reuploaded  23:54, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Alright cool, thanks for obliging. Re-CBA?

Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
"me? i loved him." r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <19:37, 6/01/2019> ​

Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

re-up  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:12, 6/07/2019> ​

This might sound a bit weird, but can you lessen the shading a touch inside the ear? Cats' ears can be on the translucent side so I don't think the shadows would be quite that dark 04:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-up nah you're good  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <15:58, 6/09/2019> ​

I think the haunch should show more of the stripes; the MC here does show some that aren't consistent with this placement of 'em. I know the queen came first, but there's also some parts that aren't visible on the queen that should be made to match the MC.

Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <22:59, 6/09/2019> ​

Smooth out the haunch shading a bit? 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

honestly it could be smoothed out everywhere

Could you curve the shoulder shading up onto the shoulder. Right now it seems like it stops abruptly there and kinda throws it off a bit. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

re-up Mink, can you explain? I'm not quite sure of what you're saying. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:55, 6/06/2019> ​

Its definitely 100% optional, but curving the shading to form along the shoulder, like at the very edge of it so it isn't straight and appears 3d instead of 2d <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:23, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading depth to the arm? And perhaps define the depth just a bit on the tail and by the chin/muzzle area. 01:59, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think I see a little leaking shading on the tail. By the way, you may wanna put your signature next to the image because it disappeared. 16:07, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

re-up i just put it there? wth? r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:02, 6/09/2019> ​

I'm a little confused on the source...most of it seems to be saying the light is shining < way because of how the facial shading is placed, in which case I think a little shading on the < side of the haunch and a bit more shading to define the neck would likely be called for. Or, if it's the other way, then just the facial shading would be on the wrong side, to make the light go > way

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out? 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out more. It's still very sharp, and the revision history shows only slight changes.

The design was supposed to be sharp, so I'm tryng to smoothbit as much as I can while kesping the shading design. But yeah, ill fix that <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:45, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think if you lighten it just a little more, you can remove some of the sharpness - but Spooky's comment still stands, its still sharp.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:41, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading leaking away from the lineart on the belly, underneath the tail, and on the > back leg. If could nab away waste floating about and add some light to the tail tip as well, that'd be great.

re-ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:30, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the back of the head/neck area? It looks rather blocky in comparison to the rest of the image.

Apple Blossom (W) ~ For Approval
okay thats enough cat doodles for tonight

01:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

The colors dont quite seem to match her others. The stripes should be sharper and the design should probably match the style thats going on there, she seems to have side stripes more so on her other side which should probably match this side too in style <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i think you should darken the shading a little :O 18:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Reuploaded

19:35, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

there's a line of waste underneath the tail and the back paw furthest from us doesn't seem to be filled in

Still working?

Reuploaded SCHOOL'S OUT!

00:23, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yay Ari!! Anyways, that back paw Moonyy mentioned doesn't appear to filled in. All I see is the background. 00:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded pftttt

00:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face around the muzzle 04:56, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There should be one more tail stripe. 20:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

23:09, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Nice job, Ari^^ Smooth the shading in -> ear, maybe even lighten it a little. The stripes appear softer on her other images, could you blur/smooth them some? And sharpen the white on the head, it looks a bit too soft there. Disconnect the ear and face white on <- side? I don't believe it's supposed to be connected there. 02:13, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Patch! =)

23:20, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

For lack of better words, I think the color of the stripes should be more defined. They seem defined in shape on the other images, almost as if paintbrush-drawn then blurred. I think the ones here might have smudged out the visibility a little bit. It still matches with Patch's comment in that these should be soft(er) than they had been, but they should still be as defined in color.

Reuploaded i tried

01:00, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Approval
My first charart ever lol. (Hand drawn shading, not texture) <span style="">15:29 Wed Jun 5

Could you add some shading to the hind paw? 15:37, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think there'd be a touch less white on the tail, basing off the apprentice

Could you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:27, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this tomorrow. I'm exhausted from work the past few days oof <span style="">22:25 Sat Jun 8

Reuploaded <span style="">14:19 Sun Jun 9

Could you perhaps even out the transition between the draw-on styled shading vs. to where it kinda becomes the typical blurred style? It's just right there where it switches over that looks a little off to me

Ambermoon (Alt K) - For Approval
love the new blanks. Very cute 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:17, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:48, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the tail from the haunch shading. 01:09, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  02:02, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading. 16:13, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define it some when you do expand it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:11, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's always shading... you'd think I'd know how to do it by now 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source- where is the light coming from? 19:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's coming from the left--where her face is. How would you emphasize that? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

With that, there shoud be no shading on the top of the tail. 22:52, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

To add to Potato's comment, to make it as coming to face, there wouldn't be any shading on the < side of the haunch either, the shading on the bottom of the tail would extend to the tailtip, there'd be more on the > side of the arm, and some extending to the chin.

Reuploaded Completely redid shading. With my luck, probably made it worse, but, whatever 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Switch your haunch shading to the other side. 20:14, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needn’t go so high up the backbone. Also - the haunch is unshaded. Should be some to form the shape of the bum; kinda how it is on some of the other images around.

Aspenfall (W) ~ CBA
tried to match the old warrior, was hard since it shows a different side. i put that weird splotch of grey near the chest because i thought the old warrior patch would be sliiiiightly visible. the rest i just tried to match the style and the patch placings on the back? i also colour-picked it for everything

edit: i now see the waste oops, i'll remove that next reup

expand & darken the shading to the right of the image? <span style="">20:10 Thu Jun 6

expand the white in the eye, i can barely see it 03:48, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups did the shading, but the pupil and white placement is the exact same as what i've used for all my other warriors, so i'd like a second opinion before i change it

Add a bit of shading at the base of the chest to connect with the > side of the cat


 * I think I still have the old file if you want it 04:53, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reups the file would be great thanks! my email is moony24683@gmail.com

reups wasn't much i could do about the patch placement because of the blank's orientation, but the colours now all match but it's only a sliiiight difference

Hmm could you add a touch of shading on the chin and define it on the < ear? I also think the shading on the part of the tail just connected to the backside (what appears to be the top half, to us) could have it's shading defined as well, and then I think we're good to go

reups

CBA?

Appledawn (W) ~ For Approval
It's the only one of the set, so there's nothing I have to be matching, right? I also don't know if I'm happy with the eyes or texture... 00:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

We recently agreed to match the old images, so this would have to match the old warrior. But I think the colors match close enough with the exception of the eye color and ear pink...the stripes should be curlier. 01:04, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading and shading depth?

Define the light and the pupil in the eye 02:22, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be a bit thicker. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:39, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, that was painful. Am I allowed to keep the texture? I don't think the old one had any... 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It did not have texture, as far as I'm aware.

Do I have to remove it, then? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It does have to match the old image, so yeah

Reuploaded Well, that's annoying that I wasted so much time w/ the texture, but at least it's easy to undo 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, and expand it on the back?

Reuploaded One of these days I'll know how to do shading... 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Practice makes perfect! With this source, there would not be shading on  >> that side of the haunch. There would also be shading on the top of the most visible hind leg, and the bottom tail shading where the tail touches the ground would be on the top part, not the bottom. 04:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading from the flank leaking onto the top of the haunch. Could you add depth to the hind leg and foot, along with the front legs? Perhaps expand the shading on the front leg and connect it to the shoulder too? If you're trying to match the original image, I think the stripes could stand to be a bit more... wavy? I'm not sure what word to use to describe it. The earpink in <- ear looks a little duller than what you have in the other, it looks a little off. This image is turning out great! 18:25, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Dappletail (W) - CBA
Yay managed to snag three torties! - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add/expand the ginger patch on the back? this orange patch. And maybe define the stripes? 00:22, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Vec means dapples^^  00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried with the ginger patch, but I don't think it would show up with this angle. the starclan cat seems to show its back and/or the top of the leg and I don't think it would be that visible. If others disagree I'll expand it more. Also what specific dapples? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:36, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Just the dapples in general. I'm having a hard time seeing them is all. 03:18, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I actually did define the stripes in the ginger patches, as Vec originally said. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:24, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:06, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (W) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hate to be that person, but would she get a warrior image? 00:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think she would, as she was a Early Settler, then medicine cat. 00:44, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think this is actually a mistake from Secrets of the Clans. To my knowledge, I think she was called a warrior at first. It would be a mistake.

I just had a look through my copy, and I couldn't find anything that directly stated she was a warrior - or what rank she was prior to her medicine cat appointment.

Dusk Nose (Ki) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

you need the file? also, could you smooth out the shading?

I think the patches are...streakier? Have more streaks in them? 00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think I need the file? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

The black patch on the head should be covered in ginger. On the hunter it's covered in shading

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I meant the area behind the ear. sorry for being unclear

The paws are also gonna have to be cream according to the tweak page. 17:41, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) ~ CBA
like this one so much more than the old one :p

00:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading lines to smooth out the transition on the shoulder shading? The very top. And some more on the haunch and tail shading, too, while you're at it. 03:20, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading.

00:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading just at where the tail bends in the middle, and define it on the < ear?

Reuploaded Tried my best with smoothing it

17:53, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Cherrytail (W) ~ For Approval
wad made to match the old warrior since that is first in the set, also match to the apprentice. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading depth on the back paw closest to us; the shading looks darker than the rest of the image. Also, define tail shading near the base of it.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:31, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white paws, some

Leaking shading on the white paw closest to us, and could you smudge out the ginger patch right underneath her ---> eye? 20:13, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I don’t think changes are showing, Mink. I can’t see a difference between the uploads, can reupload again or show the changes elsewhere?

Comparing to the other images, the ginger needs to be a tad more orangish. This looks yellow. 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Branch (K) ~ CBA


Add a little bit of shading to the middle section and the top of the arm?

Can you darken the base? It seems to be lightwr than the old one <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reups colour-picked the first colour from the kit, but tried to find a darker colour to colour-pick. also hope i got what you meant, max? if not could you please redline since i don't quite understand

You're all good, you got the area I meant so no stress! :D

CBA?

Dawnbright (W) ~ For Approval
There was an attempt made.. if I'm not allowed to keep the textured shading i can remove it! 13:14, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Its definitely allowed, could you darken it actually <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

should have "for approval", added it for you.

14:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you brighten up the white? If you're matching the old images (which as OA of the set, I'd like that), I used pure white for it.

The shading depth can also be defined as well. 17:58, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

yikes my memory is concerning Re-Uploaded! 19:38, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes just a bit on the head? 20:08, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnbright (K) ~ For Approval
she 13:14, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Same as warrior <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

what i said on the warrior.

14:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Same as warrior; brighten up the white.

Re-Uploaded! Is this better? I kinda overworked it.. 19:45, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

could u define the shading a bit? i know this might mess the white but i can barely see it.

02:32, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Milkfur (MV) (W) - CBA
what the heck was my middle school self thinking???? 14:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste under the tail, and there seems to be many uncolored/unshaded pixels on said tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:27, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reup 03:23, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Berrynose (Ki) - For Approval
Hmm... I have regrets. Tried to match the apprentice images. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing until the image number is lowered. 16:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There is enough room now for this image. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Un-withdrawn due to space. 18:50, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Base needs to lighter to match the other images in the set. 19:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is called Juni colorpicks from the wrong place on the image. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think the texture should be softer

Reuploaded. 01:15, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lessen how high the shading goes on the haunch just a little

do you want the file? also, the texture has more shape to it rather than just being lines 12:54, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

The file would be greatly appreciated. My email is mello.roxas13@gmail.com 15:25, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the texture for now, and also fixed haunch shading. Will probably mess with it more once I have the file. 15:49, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. 22:47, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

the fur should look shorter, and the highlights should also be defined on the texture 03:24, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hopefully this is getting better and not worse. 14:02, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Darktail (Ki) - CBA
He looks far too cute to be Darktail tbh. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing for same reasons as Berrynose's kit. 16:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)  The page is currently at 60, so I believe this is allowed now? If so, un-withdrawing. 18:49, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the white? 20:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

The black should be sharper on the booty <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:07, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the patch on the eye? This is adorable! 02:30, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Still too cute to be Darktail imo. 15:29, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you reduce the shading just a smidge on the haunch, and add a little shading on the > side of the front arm that shows? (kinda where it meets to a T with the tail, forming an elbow of sorts)

Reuploaded. 22:47, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some shading on the shoulder in the area between the head and haunch? Images like Beetlenose, Primrosepaw, Wavepaw, and Dusk Nose have similar sources and have what I'm talking about. 01:38, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:00, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Break up that larger black patch that's hanging above the haunch a little bit, and I think the black patch farthest << way would need to be removed, since it's close to hanging above the arm, and the other images don't have any there

Reuploaded. Like this? 15:30, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Yup. CBA?

Crouchfoot (Alt. W) - CBA
And Crouchfoot makes three. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing for the same reasons as Berrynose's and Darktail's kit images. 16:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC) The page is currently at 60, so I believe this is allowed now? If so, un-withdrawing. 18:48, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I think it's fine. I'm having a hard time distinguishing the base from the lineart. Is there any way you can lighten the base? 20:38, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm just bad at colorpicking today it seems. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe lighten a little more. I still can't see anything rip

Reuploaded. 22:47, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Spireclaw (Ki) ~ CBA
17:35, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the transition from the white fur to the black fur should be blended out some. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  21:42, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think it would fine since this is the OG design. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

it looks just a tad softer on the warrior, so I have to agree with jose here. 23:13, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:14, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think you just uploaded the old file? 01:17, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Uh no. Patch added more white fur to the haunch.

01:36, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

No, she accidently uploaded the old one, Spirekit.kit, and it was showing as a redlink since that file was deleted. However, she fixed it before you commented. 01:38, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think there's an awkward match of missing texture right above the tail? It could be the shading, but I can't tell. 02:04, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Above where the tail meets the back, I mean. 02:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did I get it? I also made the highlights darker. 02:25, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Dawncloud (W) ~ CBA
Changed the colors to match the others -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:45, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad softer. 21:03, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe curve that stomach shading just a little more? It looks a little hard-edged, but, that might be because of its placement on a stripe too?

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:17, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:43, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) ~ Declined
All colors from mc/rogue images. 00:41, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

This might be the same case as Dappledpelt, but, was he directly called a warrior in one of the field guides?

Not sure on the other, but I did check up on this one and found it wasn't in use prior to us removing for the redoes, and there isn't an accompanying cite as the original one was an assumption altogether. Must've been mistakenly added to the to-do, so I'll go ahead and decline this.

Flywhisker (K) ~ CBA


CBA?

Crouchfoot (K) - CBA
Will probably define the shading a bit more tomorrow 01:11, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

reup 18:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Nectarsong (K) ~ For Approval
OA claim given to me by patch :)

01:51, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the foreleg shading a bit? 02:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups

02:20, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

could you possibly darken/define the texture just a smidge? 14:21, June 9, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reups

12:52, June 10, 2019 (UTC) reups oops. looked the same

12:54, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the texture just a bit more? Maybe adding some more on another layer could also help. 17:44, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oddfoot (K) - CBA
warrior isn't in use so new pattern kids

didnt we agree that unless you're the oa, you have to match the pattern in the set, even if its not in use? (which was the entire outcome of the shade pelt drama) 12:53, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Max is the OA, they said earlier that they are the OA especially since the warrior isn't in use. So this is fine imo. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

but hes not the OA of the warrior, is he? 15:11, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Checked, and the OA of the warrior is Paleclaw. 15:24, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think the difference here is it isn't 'not-in-use' in the way that's 'we removed all the kits and warriors to re-add them to pages' but rather the 'not-in-use' in that Oddfoot's warrior is an invalid cite with an image that was just kept of courtesy. It's not going to be redone into the set like Shade Pelt's needed to be, and this is a single by count. And since it's an OA single, I personally think they can do whatever.

The warrior isn't in use due to an invalid cite, meaning Max is free to do whatever they want with the pattern. There was no proof that Oddfoot was a warrior, which is why the cite was removed.

Isn't his name proof in itself though? As we all know only warriors/meds get unique suffixes so it wouldn't make sense for him not to be a warrior. He should at least get an unknown residence blank (could they be used for instances like this? Maybe a new blank should be made for situations like this) since he most likely was not a kit. But besides that, can you make the base color a tad more brown? It looks gray to me, while the stripes look (very dark) brown. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:12, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

The name is only proof he was at least an adult cat, but we don't know if he was a warrior.. it's likely that he was, given that Nightmask was the deputy at the time, but there's still nothing outright calling him a warrior. Regardless, that discussion is for PC and this should only focus on the art, not whether or not a cite is valid.

reuploaded

CBA?

Night (HJ) (Ki) - For Approval
Oreo cat returns, and yes the shading is tinted purple.

Could you define the shading some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Where? Because I can see it pretty clearly pretty much everywhere. o.O

i can also see the shading everywhere, but maybe dull the tint down slightly so that it doesnt clash with the colors as much? 03:25, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, it's not clashy enough that it disrupts the colours presented, so I think the tint is fine as is. It's clear there's shading and that's what counts.

I do think some depth might assist^^ I can definitely see it's shape, but on the haunch in particular it comes off flat

Rushtooth (W) - For Approval
Everything from the DF, including shading layers/opacity. <span style="">14:24 Sun Jun 9

the stripes look thing on the others, could you possibly thin them out some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is over the page limit of 60 images. 15:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Never mind, some images were archived. 15:29, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading a bit. 20:10, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt W 3) - For Approval
It is the only one for this description, so I can change the pattern, since it was also my original image. I prefer this one lol <span style="">14:24 Sun Jun 9

Same as Rushtooth, this is over the page limit. 15:02, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Read above ^^  15:30, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the face just a smidge?

Honey Pelt (W) ~ CBA


CBA? 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Flowerstem (AVoS) (W) ~ CBA


CBA? 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Wavepaw (K) ~ For Approval


Could you smooth out the tail shading?

Reuploaded

Could you define the depth a tad on the head and foreleg shading? 17:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Bouncefire (W) ~ For Approval
this was fun 17:06, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add a touch of shading underneath the chin?

Reups Not sure why I'm struggling with the shading so much. 16:37, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Patch Pelt (Ki) - For Approval
Any advice on how to shade this would be appreciated. The colors are straight from the file for Milkweed's queen, which I got from Jayie. I wanted to try and make him match his mother in coloring. I'm thinking of going and adding a little more black to him...

Re-uploaded. I could not get that to work, so I did a few things.

I'm afraid I still can't see it very well, though I've checked on a few. Might I suggest a very dark purple on a high opacity?

Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 19:44, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit and maybe lighten it some. 20:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:43, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Beetlenose (K) - For Approval
colourpicked from the warrior

Fernsong (Ki) ~ For Approval
oa claim that spooky gave to me. this was a hard pattern though :(

23:24, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading just a tiny bit on the top of the haunch? He is babey... 23:27, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

There should be paler streaks right above the eyes, paler parts sweeping up along the haunch lineart, and paler front paws. And the stripes appear more...scratchy? Not at smooth and uniform. I'm sorry that I'm bad with words. >.< 01:32, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

This looks a bit darker than his other images? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:43, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I colorpicked directly from his apprentice image. 11:31, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Cora (W) - For Approval
Same source as Cloversplash. Comments? 01:05, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! I forgot her bitten ear, I'll add that in a moment. 01:06, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:20, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I know you're using clover's source but the shading could be smoothed a bit more.

12:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

honestly, it could be smoothed a lot. its too hard edged <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:27, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:51, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again tweaked things about the ears. 17:59, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 01:44, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading just a bit? 02:08, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:12, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the uanch shading? 03:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Petaldust (W) ~ For Approval
02:08, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the ginger. Her old ones seemed to show more ginger iirc <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Hopefully the changes show. 16:38, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Petaldust (K) ~ For Approval
02:08, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

^per the warrior <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 16:38, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Star Flower (W) ~ For Approval


For lack of better words, I don't think all the stripes should start at the dorsal stripe and go all the way across. The other images showing this side show at least a little of the stripes ending before they reach over, and some stripes not connecting to the back, making them less uniform

The stripes are also more scraggly and rugged on the other images. Could you define the texture, also? Seems more visible on the other images. 17:50, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (K) - For Approval
idk how i matched this back in the day wtf 04:42, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the forearm and the shoulder/haunch area?

reup 06:50, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Quick Water (W) ~ For Approval


Define the chest shading on the white.

Could you possibly define the white on the legs, they look gray? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:45, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Smudge out the white haunch some more? There is also waste above the ---> ear and a triangle piece on the left side of the tail. 17:53, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Millie (Alt. W) - For Approval
the original was the first in this set; matched the side to loner which was the second in the set.

Could you add some light to the stomach below the shoulder? there should be a little light there with the source <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:29, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarheart (W) - For Approval


05:56, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading and lessen it onnthe shoulder and stomach? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:12, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the lower chest and it could stand to be darkened a little more. 17:56, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Lizardstripe (W) ~ For approval
i'll lighten the stripes more later 07:42, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (Alt. K) - for approval
jesus dont look at the file history weird things happened

13:07, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Clawface (K) - For approval
danger boy 14:18, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Brightsky (W) - For Approval
The shading's pretty icky, I'll probably change it. 14:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The ears are a tad flat, perhaps define the shading on them? 14:31, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:50, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The ears should be white with a little bit of ginger on the tips 18:00, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Stoatfur (BS) (W) - For Approval
The first image I ever did. Honestly, don't know how I got the original to look like it does. 14:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (W) - For Approval
17:41, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

This is the old one, are the changes showing? 17:41, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The changes are showing now. Good work on one of the trickiest patterns! There needs to be a lot more flecks and the brown is lighter. 17:45, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:55, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Would you like one of the files? I think I still have Jayce's old warrior and I have the hunter if you want them. They might help technicality wise. 18:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the brown, all im seeing is gray <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:48, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) - For Approval
17:43, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Black Ear (W) - For Approval
this is a god tier design 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The patches need to be more sharply smudged. 17:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded not quite sure what you meant by this but i tried?? lol 17:57, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the light in the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:48, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Thriftpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
19:02, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Mind defining the shading a bit? It blends in with the color of her pelt and the texture and it's kind of hard to see. 19:29, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's no texture; that's the shading. 19:33, June 10, 2019 (UTC)