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Dapplepelt ~ Silver Nomination
Not much to say. River pelt  00:24, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible for it to be expanded more? It looks awfully short. If not, supporting. Echostar 00:17, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can any quotes be added? Apart from that I'm supporting. 21:48, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think the history is as good as it is going to get. However, yes, she needs some quotes, although I'm not sure if she ever actually says anything. ;) 16:46, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't. XD However, I believe the Spoiler Warning End goes before the references? It's like that on most articles. :P -- 15:04, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before the vote? 14:10, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up. 02:45, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Littlecloud - Silver Nomination
Putting this back up. :) Expanded Starlight substantially. -- 21:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can more be added to Outcast or The Fourth Apprentice? Night Whispers should be expanded some more.-- 22:49, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Could Fading Echoes, Midnight, or Secrets of The Clans be expanded at all? River pelt  01:48, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

He was an extremely minor character in Outcast in the first place, and I think Night Whispers, Fading Echoes, and Midnight are fine; I expanded them before and they look good to me. I will definitely try to expand The Fourth Apprentice and Secrets of the Clans, though. Thanks =) -- 02:18, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded The Fourth Apprentice a ton. Unfortunately, Littlecloud appears only once, so I hope his section looks satisfactory :) I'll get right on to Secrets of the Clans. -- 15:11, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Secrets of the Clan is expanded. He only is mentioned very little throughout the book, though. Any other comments? =) -- 17:26, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Could a Dangerous Path be expanded? Echostar 01:05, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Done. ;) -- 02:23, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Nice! Supporting. Echostar 11:39, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

If Outcast can not be expanded anymore, the just use the alleg template. Although, doesn't he say something on the journey to the Moonpool? 15:41, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Littlecloud only says one thing. I expanded the section as much as possible, which isn't really much. Echostar 22:51, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Echostar. :) I checked the HarperCollins website, and he does indeed only appear once and say one thing in the entire book. Other comments? -- 18:04, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

All of his quotes are either from Night Whispers or Fading Echoes. Replace some of those with some other quotes earlier in the series. 17:09, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Does that really matter? I mean, I can understand how you want quotes over a variety of time, Whitestorm, but Littlecloud has a lot of good, in-depth, and thoughtful quotes from Night Whispers and Fading Echoes. I suppose I can try, though. :) -- 18:10, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

No, it doesn't matter a whole lot, but it makes the article a whole lot more intresting. Also, the quotes he has right now portray him as a worried, fretful person, which he isn't always. It sets up a false image. I don't think it should be too hard to find a few quotes from NP or OS. 21:54, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

I see your point. :) I'll keep my eye out. ;) -- 22:03, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I've replaced a quote from NW with a quote from Rising Storm. It's not as good, but it's variety. What do you think? :) -- 21:54, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

That looks better. :) Comments before the vote? 14:09, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up. 02:45, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Buzzardstar~ Silver Nomination
All of his appearances are mentioned, and I believe his article is adequate. Comments? Echostar 11:35, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

I believe the Spoiler Warning End should be before the References, not after. At least, that's the way it is in most articles. :) And could quotes me added? If not, that's okay. Otherwise, his article looks great! ;) -- 17:45, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed the Spoiler Warning End. You're right, Midnite; quotes should definitely be added, but the only book that would have it would be Battles of the Clans, and I can't find my copy. So could someone look into that? Echostar 19:11, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Added some quotes. 17:42, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect! Thanks! 71.173.146.22 19:04, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before vote? 16:24, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the second regular quote have a punctuation mark? :3 -- 22:21, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it. Resuming CBV. 13:25, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up. 17:25, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pine - Silver Nomination
I added quotes and expanded all his sections. He looks good in my opinion. 17:33, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Nice! He looks opulent! Supporting. Echostar 11:42, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. His article is well filled out. 02:20, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before vote? 16:26, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up. 17:36, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur- Quotes
I don't know if I'm meant to post this here, but it has been brought to my attention that Brackenfur has been a character since Into the Wild, and he doesn't have any quotes, not one. Could users please work on that? I'm positive there are some good quotes somewhere. Echostar 19:59, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

This should be posted on his talk page. 20:44, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine to have it here, although it might do more good on his talk page. :) It is fine at both places. I, myself, won't have much time to look fro quotes, but I hope someone does. 15:40, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

When I'm looking for quotes or expanding Character articles, I look at all the books the character appeared in that I own, then go to the Browse Inside for the books and search the character's name. It mostly just gives you the page number, but if you have the book, then you can just look it up in there and you end up finding pretty good quotes and interesting info. Echostar 22:58, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but I won't have time for that either. 17:14, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

I can find him some quotes-- 07:40, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Pebbleheart - Silver Nomination
His article is fulled out to the maximum. He only appears on 2 pages, with no speaking role, so I think he looks good. 18:53, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand Secrets of the Clans just a bit more? If not, supporting. 71.173.146.22 19:05, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, I said that he only appears in that a little bit. Only seen as sleeping to Mothflight. 19:07, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Could a quote be added? The history looks fine, but it still looks awfully short. Echostar 22:56, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

No quotes. He doesn't say anything. Let me repeat this, he is only seen one, with no speaking role. 22:58, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

You're right, Frostheart. However, shouldn't he be noted as the first ShadowClan medicine cat? :3 -- 18:18, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

He is. 18:20, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I saw it. XD *facepalm* Stupid me. I don't think I saw it. The article looks awesome; supporting. =) -- 18:40, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Supporting-- 07:40, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Echosong- Silver Nomination
I added some quotes and expanded SkyClan's Destiny a lot. I don't have Firestar's Quest so I couldn't expand it. 18:00, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Impressive, Rainy. :) There are some problems, however. First, there is something wrong with the quote at the bottom; I'll fix it if I can. =) Second, you have to understand that Echosong appears 11 times in Firestar's Quest under the name Echo, and 39 times under the name Echosong. That's 50 appearances in total, and you can't just leave it like that because you don't have the book. Perhaps you could borrow Firestar's Quest from the library, or check it out at Borders. Anyways, make sure you note all of her major appearances and it should be fine. I'll try to expand it, too, if I get ahold of the book, but you get my point. XD Everything else looks awesome. :D -- 18:14, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the quote, hope that's alright. :3 18:19, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Frostheart :) Ok, I expanded Firestar's Quest a little, only adding a few small things. I might be able to get the book this week, but if not I'll probably get it next week. 03:20, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can fix FQ this weekend, if no cat gets it by then. 14:32, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

That would be great! I probably can't get it until Monday. Thanks! :) 14:36, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

I already expanded Firestar's Quest, if you don't mind. :) I'm sorry if I got it done so late, Rainy. XD My apologies. In my opinion, everything else looks good, except for the fact that there seems to be some weird problem with reference tags. :P -- 21:27, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, I'll try and fix that but I've never dealt with reference tags before. :P 21:54, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed it with permission from Raineh. :D 23:00, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Frostheart. :) 23:58, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Most part of the FQ section is written in past tense, and has some other style errors as well; these should be fixed. 14:23, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I made it present tense and I think I fixed some errors. 15:11, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is what was wrong with Echosong's first regular quote, Raineh: When Echosong was talking with Leafstar, I think she said, "StarClan chose you as our leader, not Firestar." Now, if that's the case, I can understand that you were trying to put that in italics by putting two apostrophes around it to give it emphasis, right? Well, you can't do that, because the quote template is actually in italic form. You just put it in normal type for regular quotes, but that quote was a dialogue a-b quote, and I have no idea how to get it on there. XD Anyways, I fixed the quote for you, and the Quotes heading has to be under Heading 2, so I fixed that, too, if you don't mind. :) Everything else looks great! :D Supporting. -- 22:22, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfur - Silver Nomination
Hawkfur is a very minor character, so I fleshed out as much info as I could. I mainly just cleaned up the page a bit. 03:05, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Code of the Clans can be expanded. 02:19, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

I don't believe it can. Hawkfur's really minor, and he's only mentioned a few times. 22:51, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Wow he is pretty minor. Supporting-- 07:38, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Forum Discussions
Hey everybody. :) I am going to try something new. Instead of holding discussions on the talk page, where they take up a lot of space, I am going to make Forum Discussions for them. I have already put a few up, and I hope you all will take a look at them. :)

Content Drive : Dissussing what our new Content Drive should be. Featured Article : Discussing the Featured Article for Feburary.

I want to see how this will work out, and if it will be easier this way. Also, if you think there is a topic or idea that needs to be discussed with this project, contact me or Moonflight and we will put a Forum Discussion topic up, about that. 19:00, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker- Silver Nomination
I added a few quotes and expanded The Fourth Apprentice and added some other small things. Comments? 03:11, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. :) I fixed a layout problem for you, I hope you don't mind. ;) (The quote section was smack-dab in the middle between the members section and the tree o.O) Could some better quotes be added? The regular quotes she has right now (not the main quote) don't seem to describe her character well and don't have much meaning. -- 02:32, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I got rid of the quote about the rock, but the other one I think describes her feisty and defensive nature. The other quote I put describes that too, but if others think not then I'll try and find other ones. 15:31, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, no, the quotes now look fine. ;) But if you can find a better one to replace the second regular quote in her quotes section, that would be nice. :) Could Dark River or The Sight be expanded? If not, supporting. =) -- 21:47, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded Dark River, but not The Sight because that was her only apperance in the book. I couldn't find any better quotes to replace the one you mentioned. 22:43, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed up a few things and completed the Night Whispers section-- 07:35, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Slatepelt~ Silver Nomination
Looks good. 04:25, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

It does. It's very impressive for such a minor character. ;) Supporting-- 02:35, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. :) Supporting. 15:34, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Supporting-- 07:17, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hollystar - Silver Nomination
I expanded the history a tad and fixed the Spoiler Warning. I might as well nominate her, since I got the other 3 leaders. XD Comments? :) -- 18:37, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible Code of the Clans be expanded? If not, supporting. I also fixed a layout problem. 04:21, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing the problem. :) I didn't even see it. XD And no, I already tried expanding CotC but Hollystar's only mentioned twice, once when she says something and once when she's noted as the leader of ShadowClan at the time. -- 21:10, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

I made the quote already there her main quote. Can you find any more?-- 07:17, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Nightshine. ^^ And no, Hollystar only every says one thing throughout the whole book. -- 14:57, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Join- Mothfire
Hi peoples! I want to ask if i can join this project! So can i join this project?

My warrior name is Mothfire! I came up with it myself! =D 21:55, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your intrest in joining us! :) I will add you in soon. If you have any questions ask any experienced member, read our FAQ, or check out the front page. 22:50, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Riverpelt
Hello All. I am sad to announce that Riverpelt will be leaving us due to personal reasons. :( I know I will never forget her hard work and dedication to this project. She succesfully nominated many silver articles and even some Gold articles. I know I will deeply miss her. :( 23:33, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Riverpelt was a huge chunk of this Project. She had tons of experience, which helped her in her Senior Warrior nomination passing. The contributions she made helped make the wiki a better place. She always did her best, and was determined to do reach higher to help the desperately help-needed sections in the wiki in general. Although I didn't know her that well, I did know that she had extreme dedication to the wiki. I wish her all the best, no matter where she goes and what her true destiny may be. I know that she will make good choices, be successful and do well, and choose the best path for her. May StarClan light her path-and her heart. I don't know what will happen next to Riverpelt, but one thing's for sure: Her amazing contributions will never be forgotten. -- 02:26, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpaw (SC)~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 03:29, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Supporting-- 07:14, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fantastic job, Iceheart. :) Supporting. -- 15:02, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lakestorm - Silver Nomination
His article is complete-- 07:12, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, Nightshine! =) Supporitng-- 15:01, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Good job, supporting. :) 17:39, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow - Silver Nomination
I filled in all the history and the citations are complete. He never actually said anything in the series so he can't have any quotes.-- 07:12, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can NW be expanded? If not, supporting. 16:05, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

I searched through it yesterday and those were the only two times he was seen-- 19:06, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's supposed to be a space between the Gallery and the Spoiler Warning End, I fixed it for you if you don't mind. ;) Everything else looks awesome! Supporting. =) -- 22:17, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Starlingpaw - Silver Nomination
His article looks good as well-- 07:12, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Incredible for a minor character. Supporting. :) -- 14:59, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (WC) - Silver Nomination
Might as well. The character doesn't really..have any roles. 16:10, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, supporting. :) 17:41, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Supporting as well-- 19:07, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Understandable. XD Supporting. -- 22:11, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Honeyfern - Silver Nomination
Thoughts? It looks pretty good. 16:10, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can the Power of Three sections be expanded? She also needs some quotes-- 19:14, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Littlebird- Silver Nomination
Not much to say about this one. Comments? 17:45, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Supporting 17:47, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Supporting-- 19:13, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's a character named Littlebird? 0_o Looks good regardless. Supporting. 21:22, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you didn't know? :3 Anyways, this looks fine. Supporting. =) -- 22:01, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Broken Shadow - Silver Nomination
I expanded Dark River and Long Shadows. Her article looks more than good enough for such a minor character. :) Comments? -- 22:09, January 9, 2011 (UTC)