Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=For Approval= Take it to the approval page

=Tweaking= None

Poppydawn (Ki) - Redone
I’ll darken the shading if needed. This is the first one I’ve done on this iPad so I’m not used to how it shows colors. 19:32 Fri Oct 19

could you darken the shading some please? Other than that it looks awesome! Minkclaw Winter is coming. 19:52, October 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof thanks 20:00 Fri Oct 19

This looks good enough in my eyes to be moved to the Approval page, but if others critizize that's fine too. Maybe thicken her stripes and make her tail a little more fluffy.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:27, October 19, 2018 (UTC)Potato Flakin

I think the size of the stripes matches the other images, and since these blanks are notoriously small and sometimes a pain to show detail, if they were any thicker they wouldn't match as well. Same with the tail-I think it's thick enough. As long as it is thicker than the original lineart, which it is. It doesn't have to be super-extra poofy to match. Also, what you are suggesting in your first sentence, Potato, is not what the tweak page is for; it's different from the approval page. May I suggest reading up on our guidelines for future reference? 00:57, October 20, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make the shading a bit darker? Also, please make the earpink in ---> this ear more vibrantHeyoitpotater (talk) 22:31, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is fine, as is the ear pink. This image was only supposed to have minor tweaks done to it, and the excess suggestions are diverting from what it was nominated for. ​​​​​

This image is said to be redone entirely, so I think its fair game to suggest other things. If this were tweaked that'd be one thing but it says redone. Regardless, while I agree the shading is fine, the ear pink on the right is barely noticable -- at least I can't see it well on either of my screens. Can you also darken the stripes a little bit? I don't think you should make them thicker but they're super light compared to her other images. Other than that this is cute <3 00:46, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Echoblossom. The earpink actually looks white on my screen. And the tabby stripes need to be darkened, they blend in well. We're also sorry if we are asking too many questions, Cloud.Heyoitpotater (talk) 00:33, October 23, 2018 (UTC)

I'll just be redoing this again later today after my midterm. BTW, the colors were all color picked from the rest of the set...so they actually don't blend anymore on here than they do on the rest. 15:35 Fri Oct 26

Looking better. Darken the tabby stripes just a tad more?Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:08, October 27, 2018 (UTC)

...This had no changes. And once again, these colors are all from the other images. I will darken them a very slight amount once I get time to, but I will not be making drastic changes... 16:52 Sat Oct 27

Also, the eyes should be more amber-ish. They are silver.Heyoitpotater (talk) 17:29, October 28, 2018 (UTC)

They are amber, you may just be referring to the white in the eye (on the right of the pupil) that may make it appear silver. The kit eyes are small (only about 2-3 pixels of color) so the eye color on these blanks is often not a very noticeable thing anyways.  SPO OKY FI RE 

Still working? 20:54, October 31, 2018 (UTC)

It will be uploaded tomorrow. I had to fix my car today 🙃 00:02 Thu Nov 1

Sol (KP) - Redone
This pattern reminds me of Redwillow's. 15:04 Tue Oct 30

This is such a huge improvement, and it looks wonderful! The only thing I'd suggest is that, compared to the other images, this one doesn't have near as many golden patches, especially on the face. Could you add some more in there? Beautiful pattern ^^  SPO OKY FI RE  18:48, October 30, 2018 (UTC)

WHOA that is a lot of color. Lovely work Sun, can you define shading on the left haunch? It's mostly the paw by the way.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:47, October 30, 2018 (UTC)

Would you object to defining the shading overall? If you can't, I totally understand. This pattern looks like madness.

Toadskip (W) - Redone
Third time's the charm. Original OA was me and it was tweaked by Hawkmask, then redone by me again, now redone by me again. 22:24, October 31, 2018 (UTC) Lovely work Icy! My only thing is, the earpink looks like a flat triangle. Can you possibly add some depth to it?Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:55, November 1, 2018 (UTC)