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Cats of the Park Blanks ~ Withdrawn
They're so icky omgggg please rename them for me if I named them wrong? I'm no good at lineart

I'll fill them in and fix the longhair's leg in the next upload. ;-;

I suggest looking at the other blanks, you might pick up some good points. Maybe try drawing lines that helps show the muzzle, sorta like the cave-guard or leader. Just keep trying until it seems right. 06:13, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Round the tips of the ears and maybe make the eyes a little bit smaller. 07:18 Fri Aug 21

IDK but the (our) left leg on the short haired blank looks a bit too thin on it's staring point? (My vocabulary omg ;;) I think you get what I mean? 08:44, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The muzzle looks a bit small. Try enlarging it? 09:06, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I tried... The eyes looked like aliens >.> still very icky ._.

Maybe make the edge of the eyes a /little/ sharper? 11:26, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the lines thinner? 13:19, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the muzzle? 13:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The lines don't need to be thinner, Burnt. They match the thickness on some of the blanks we have, and it's honestly fine.

Largen the eyes?  ~ Silver Cloud ~  16:25, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know, I think the lines should be thinner. Anyways can you space out the eyes a little? They look too close together. But you did an awesome job! 18:07, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's a couple of white pixels on the long-haired's left ear. Songheart (talk) 18:15, August 21, 2015 (UTC)Songheart

The eyes should have thicker lineart, and the eyes should be further apart and follow the curve of the face more. The chin should be more noticable as well. Nubface (talk) 18:33, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

The face is bent downwards at an angle. Right now, the eyes are facing forward with the same perception. If the muzzle where to be there, the eye on our left would have to be angled a bit differently, to make way for the shape of the muzzle. if that didn't make sense i'll try to explain it better 20:15 Fri Aug 21

Will this get declined if I'm gone for a week...? Because I'm going to my friend's house for a couple days.

No. A week without uploads on blanks is not fair. Blanks are a much different process than a normal image- I don't remember the timeframe we decided on, but if you don't upload for a week, you won't lose your blanks. I think we ended up picking two weeks...or something like that. Regardless, working on blanks is a very long process and there's no need to hold you to the same requirements as a normal image. It just wouldn't be fair, flat out.

Forgot to mention earlier, but the tail should be moved down a bit, especially on the shorthair. The tails rests on the ground and tends to curl around their front paws. Nubface (talk) 20:46, August 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't a little bit of the hindpaw be visible somewhat through the tail? 13:40, August 24, 2015 (UTC)

Do you think this lineart is a little... Too big? Not gonna be rude. --ShellaxySpaniel (talk) 05:10, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

The size is fine tbh. There are other blanks the same size/bigger. Also, if you were talking about the lineart itself, the thickness of the lines is fine as there are other blanks with the same thickness of lines. 21:01, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think the lineart could be just a touch smaller and the lineart just a touch thinner, but that's just me. Also, the angle of the face looks a little off - it looks like, from the position of the cat, the head is titled a bit downward, but the face seems tilted too much upward. Also, the tail is a little too high up on the shorthair, it should be even with the front paws, at least at the base, since that's where it would connect to the back. May I offer a redline to help with anatomy and such? If not, that's cool, just offering. ^^ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 21:51, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Here's a friendly nudge to not forget to upload!

I honestly think the blanks should be scaled down slightly to match the sizes of our other blanks, because as it stands right now, they are the largest. The anatomy seems to be that of a kitten? I think that the rounded paws and round face shape give this appearance, if you go with slightly more defined shapes, it should help give more of an adult cat appearance. The long furred's fur seems to be a bit spiky, do you think you could lay it flatter to the body and have it follow the direction of the body as best as you can? And it might just be me, but the perspective at which the front of the cat is versus where the butt sits seems kind of off to me and looks kind of painful for the cat's spine. Do you think you could scooch the cat's hindquaters closer to the body? I'm not an anatomy expert, and some of my advice could be wrong, and in that instance, I may be disproven and I'm fine with that, but that's personally how I would draw the blanks if I were doing them myself. I hope I helped at all. 04:04, August 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Now here's a thing, I was told to enlarge them (my original ones were way smaller) and the entire cat went crooked because I tried to redraw it. Pixelizing/scaling is a little too hard for me, or I could've been doing it wrong, and in that case can someone tell me how to do it? @Ivy, I tried my best for the fur... I kinda screwed it up. When I first drew the blank I copied exactly from an actual cat photo, so I'd like to get a second opinion on the hind legs. I lowered the short-haired tail, and I moved the eyes of both blanks down and a little more separated from each other. I hope I covered everyone I could, but if I missed something please tell me!

Could you still sharpen the eyes a little? 09:37, August 29, 2015 (UTC)

Did you make the fur a little less spikey? --&#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Russettail13/Sig&#125;&#125;. (talk) 13:27, August 29, 2015 (UTC)Russet

The fur seems fine to me - its long-furred anyways, if you're talking about the long haired blank. I hate to be pushy again, but could you maybe thin out the lines again? They just seem really thick, and I know I'm being picky for a blank with only 2 characters but... yeah. 15:09, August 29, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add whiskers? Also, try making the muzzle a little rounder. Look at the other charart images for help. I think adding little lines in between the eyes and nose helps too. 22:23, August 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think that their eyes and nose need to be moved so it looks like they're looking down. Like these: http://i.imgur.com/Z8NJeuj.png http://i.imgur.com/EkxBgJv.png The muzzle is pointing downwards (well it looks that way to me) so the eyes should point downwards too. — ☆ ＦＩＲＲＥＬ  ★    ❝ ❤ ❞  16:12, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

You didn't largen the eyes.

 ~ Silver Cloud ~  01:37, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

She didn't upload yet. Give her a bit. 01:40, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, but I think I'd have to withdraw these... I don't have time of them because of school, and my laptop is taken by my parents. I might have time to work on regular projects with the school computers, but blanks are a lot harder. Anyone can take these over if they want, I'll even allow them to use them directly (although I'm not even a fan of them myself). I can come back to them later, but it's probably going to be ages.

I'll take over, unless someone else wants to. 12:52, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

You currently have a blank as a voting choice for the Early Settlers, Princess. Could we leave this for someone who does not have one there and hasn't had a chance to make a blank? Storm, Winter, Burnt, Fox? Or anyone else that does not have a blank on the Early Settler vote? (we don't know who will win and tbh having two at once would not be right) Would you guys like to give it a try?

Yeah, that makes sense. Someone else should do it. 13:09, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can I try? :D 13:21, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Gladly, if you keep the stance that Bramblesnow provided. That's what we voted on, so that's what'll stay.

Can I do two things at once? I have willow tail up right now...or does this not count as a reservation? 13:35, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

You can keep both at once- doing blanks are not the same thing as doing images. 13:37, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Did I do it right? 14:05, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful <3 Maybe make the ears bigger? 14:09, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, cats ears are not that big, so I don't think so ... 14:11, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, but the paws are bugging me. maybe make them a bit more, on the ground, instead on the tip parts of the paws? 14:16, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 14:25, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Separate the eyes a bit more. 18:35, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

can you make the tail a little bit fluffier? theyre supposed to be longhaird but theyre honestly barely thicker than the shorthairs. also the haunch looks oddly small, and the eyes maybe should be tilted just a tad so theyre not so totally front facing. the paws should be more on the ground too- the cats are putting their weight on them. HotTeacher69 (talk) 18:39, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Honestly, the tail can be edited if the cat's tail is said to be predominantly more fluffy, like Feathertail. And I'm looking at my cat right now, comparing pictures to a shorthair cat and they're honestly not that much bigger. And the eyes aren't front facing, they're facing down already. 18:51, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the the tail on the shorthair thicker? Also, extend the mouth some more. Curve the <<<< front paw some more near the chest and curve the chest on that side more as well. Extend the haunch just a tad outwards, right now it seems to be in an awkward position in relations to the front of the body. 1:29 Tue Sep 8

I actually think the tails could be fluffier on the long-haired, but in general, just a tad bit longer. Remember, what your cat looks like is just one of many many cute and adorable kitties in existence. I also think the lineart could be a tad bit thicker to match the styles of the other blanks.

All of the blanks on this site have lines that are two pixils thick. In some places it appears to have that, but in others it looks like it has either three or one, and you want to make sure not to leave entire black areas, such as the ears. Make one white pixil in the black to break it up. Just a little tidbit of advice from someone who made a blank from scratch and occasionally does pixil work on the side. This is shaping up very nicely and you're doing great! 02:20, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the muzzle shape. 10:16, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups QnQ blanks are hard 21:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

if the longhairs have ear fur in them, the short ones should too. HotTeacher69 (talk) 11:39, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Waste on the ear on the short hair 12:30, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

reups 13:02, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding eyelashes on one of the two? (honestly there could be nothing wrong with eyelashes, but yea) ✣ H o n e y c l o u d ❈ ㅋ ㅋ

These are the male blanks. They do not get eyelashes Storm  &#9835;  12:41, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

The longhaired tail looks kinda weird with the one pixel wide solid line at the bottom of the tail. I presume it's supposed to be flat on the ground? If you could add some tufty parts of fur on the tail, that would be lovely. Also, there are places where it's still one pixel thick (like the paws, arms, ect) - they should be two pixels thick, as to match the other adult blanks.

reups 23:42, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

The foreleg that is closer to the haunches on both blanks is too much of a straight line. Tru curving it a bit instead of just a straight leg. 1:23 Sat Sep 12

Is it just me, or is the muzzle position a bit... Awkward? It doesn't seem to line up with the way the eyes are facing. 03:10, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

I think the muzzle is too round. Most cats have slightly more tapered muzzles. 13:50, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing ;-; blanks are too much for me 13:58, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Might I take over? 14:04, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Echosnout (MC) ~ For Approval
omg yas. 00:04, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

As a RiverClan cat, she needs long fur. Also, blur and lighten the shading a bit. Over all, very nice. 00:21, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is fine imo. Shading doesn't have to be super light/super blurred if the artist doesn't want it to be like that. 00:34 Tue Sep 1

reups changed to long haired blank (Ill get the waste off the tail) 03:27, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Bluestar. The shading could definitely be blurred a tad. 04:06, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest, I can't even see the shading. Or it just might be my screen. 04:12, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and shoulder region. Great job, Bramble! She's very pretty lol

A lil bit of waste on the tail tip~ 17:22, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

1st. I would say i would of gotten rid of the waste when i uploaded, and second, i think it may be your screen you cant see the shading.. 20:28, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I didnt see spottehs comment, ill get to that. 20:50, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

+ shading wont seem to blur, suggestions? 20:51, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the back paws a little? 01:30, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? 21:04, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

withdrawing Wiki seems to be blocking me from the real world, so ill be gone for a month or two away from wiki.... 21:46, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

taking over and therefore re-up 13:24, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white a bit more? IDK, but maybe the herb color should be smoother? Nice job by the way. 21:07, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm struggling to see the shading on the black. Maybe lighten the black a tiiinny bit (just a tiny) and define the shading? This is really beautiful! 00:20, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 01:56, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs- I don't think the entire leg should be pretty much all in shadow. shadows are taking over ooooooh spoopy

re-up 13:25, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

define shading on the herbs? 14:19, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 23:43, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The shading still looks kinda non-existent on the herbs.

note that the last herb is dark green, therefore i can't do much about it or else the second herb color will get washed out, too :C 18:58, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 12:57, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Beebs, that doesn't mean you can't try and add some shading to it. Right now, it looks awfully flat. It's very possible to shade the herbs- I've done it, as have many others. It shouldn't just be three different colors.

re-up 14:50, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Harepounce (W) ~ For Approval
When I first made it I rushed so it looks like poo. I'm sorry. ;-; ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:31, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and neck :) 01:24 Tue Sep 1

Lighten the shading all together. 04:14, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Redone-ish by the former Skiddleybopblitz! Ech. I forgot to lighten. 22:13:55 1 Sep 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? 00:48, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry to sound stupid, but all of them or just X amount of them? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:31, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Would you mind defining it on all the legs? 20:25, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

And perhaps lighten the front legs? The legs themselves are a significantly darker brown than the other. I understand it's shading, but when you incorporate the comments above, it should look better. 21:04 Wed Sep 2

Reuploaded Posting this before bed so I may have 1,000% more errors than usual. If I forgot my signature then aw crap. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:13, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and legs. 11:16, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's getting kinda difficult for me to lighten the shading without it looking too bad, at least in my eyes. Anyway, is this gonna get declined because I was in Fort Wayne yesterday and this morning/afternoon? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:48, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

i can't see your light source 13:32, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Don't know what to do right at this moment but here is my image of her without the shading blurred. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:23, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should remove the shading on the chest. Your shading seems to be over blurred, actually. Maybe that's causing the problem. 10:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dunno if this looks any different. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:21, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Played with the bottom shading. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:00, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload numbero tres smoothed out shading ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:23, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? 13:20, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Im not in PCA so im probably not allowed to comment but define the eye depth? Pal124 (talk) 15:15, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Possibly smooth out the back shading a little more? 17:19 Sat Sep 12

Rabbitleap (TC) (K) ~ For Approval
This is acualy the first submission, '''this is my baby! Belllastar (talk) 02:49, September 1, 2015 (UTC)'''

Maybe make the earpink a little pinker? BCPrincess73 (talk) 03:05, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

I changed the title of this, for it's supposed to be "under evaluation" as you are still a kit. Can you define the shading on < side of her body? 03:13, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add/define neck shading 09:11, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. 12:02, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define and/or lighten the eye colour. She looks like she has black eyes. And Belllastar? You did awesome, alot better than me. ~Spottehwobble

Add shading down the right (our right) edge of both front legs, and the tail shading should be on the other side of the tail, if the light is coming from the left. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:51, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Belllastar (talk) 00:04, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs? 00:52, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and define the light on the little back paw. There should be at least a bit of light there. Also define the shading under the chin on the neck. 00:53, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

I still don't see any shading on the right side of the right front leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:16, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

and maybe darken the underbelly (area between the two front legs) a tad. 21:02 Wed Sep 2

You'll need to ask someone to rename this to File:Rabbitleap (TC).kit.png. 09:27 Thu Sep 3

I renamed this for you. From now on, you'll need to upload over the filename Berry gave you.

You know what you are doing, i'll promote you into an apprentice. 02:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, though? 05:41, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

YES I just need CBA Belllastar (talk) 12:23, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

If you reuploaded, you'll need to comment and say you did so. I think there should be neck shading with this source... I don't seem to see any?

Lighten the shading too, please 14:18, September 7, 2015 (UTC) re ups how do you lighten shading

Don't forget to sign your messages with ~. Anyway, to lighten shading, just lower the opacity of the shading layer. 11:57, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Belllastar (talk) 21:33, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

blur the ear pink please. 02:34, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs 13:21, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

reups Belllastar (talk) 21:03, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudberry (TC) (Medicine) ~ For Approval
I tried. Estimate, please, I want to be useful. I made "fur" light and shade. I took a flattened muzzle at Yellowfang. ✨ShineStar✨ 09:52, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but you need to reserve this on the reservation table on the main page first. Everything that gets posted here should be reserved first. Until then, I'll need to decline this image. Feel free to repost (after this has been archived and you've properly reserved the image). If you don't know how to do so, please ask, and one of us will be able to help you. =D

How to make it? ✨ShineStar✨ 10:54, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I make it! ✨ShineStar✨ 11:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading? Nice <3 01:55, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yes :) It is pleasant to you? It is possible to add? ✨ShineStar✨ 08:13, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I made shadows shorter. ✨ShineStar✨ 08:17, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs a little bit? I'm glad to see you found out how to reserve the image. =)

Can you smooth out the shading a tad? Also, this file needs to be re-named Cloudberry (TC).mc.png 14:25, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I completely changed a treatment of light and shade and I changed the name. <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 11:43, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights some. 16:00, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean and how to make it? <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 08:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

New version! I made (sorry, my english is bad =) ) texture of long fur. <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 16:32, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading more please 16:34, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Since you had asked for like, an explanation: do you see how on the other images on here, the shading is super smooth (for lack a better word) and you can't really see the transition from base color to shading? It's just shading? Blur the shading so it's like that. Also: your English is perfectly fine, don't worry. 21:07, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

I washed away as much as possible. I tried in the Gimp. Also, i ise Translate. <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 09:17, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading? It seems like it was just paint-brushed onto her in big grey blobs. If you want some help with this, you are always welcome to ask a member =) 10:03, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The transition from pelt colour to shading's a bit abrupt, you should blur it some. Gaussian Blur helps a lot :3 Also, the shading on the legs should be a little more, uh, defined. :3 13:26, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

I done. <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 07:09, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

How? <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 07:45, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail, please. Nice job. 14:07, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Eep, this is turning out beautiful. Define shading on the legs and tail as BC said, and on the head. This is great :D 03:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Please try not to repeat comments autumnbright. 14:55, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Heronwing (TC) (W) ~ For Approval
Meh.

Define the stripes - I can barely see them 15:41, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading as well 17:59, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

stripes dont have to be super defined, as long as you can tell theyre there its fine. but define the earpink just a tad? Nubface (talk) 18:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm actually having trouble making the stripes out, so a little definition wouldn't hurt.

Re-uploaded ~ Defined all stuff. c:

Could you darken the tail shading a tiny bit? This is adorable, btw. ^.^

Re-uploaded ~ :3

Could you possibly lighten/raise the opacity of the earpink just a tad please? If you believe it's fine, then feel free to disregard me. I don't feel like going into a full blown argument over the shade if others disagree. 10:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

i think the earpink is fine tbh ^^ <span style="">20:43, 09/8/2015

I can barely make out the earpink from the fur. Could you either make it more saturated and pink, or make it lighter? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:33, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 08:24, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Rooktail (W) ~ For Approval
idk 22:02, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little? Nice job. 22:13, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten fur a little bit I can't see the linart

Reuploaded I was told that the color is fine, so I'd rather not. I did define the shading, though. 23:44, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. I'm sorry, but now I'm seeing the blocky shading that should rot. If you're getting this, then maybe you should lighten the base.. or the shading. Your choice.

Still working? 01:08, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Beech (Ro) - For Approval
Pretty happy with this. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:11, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

If you could, define the tail shading? 07:09, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you soften the shading on the shoulder and thigh, please? <span style="">21:57 Sun Sep 6

can you define the shading everywhere? i cant really see it. HotTeacher69 (talk) 21:14, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think the shading's a little too dark now, but I wasn't sure how it was going to show up on my laptop screen. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:56, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the head. 14:17, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:44, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (R) ~ For Approval
Yo 01:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit, and did you smudge these ones? They don't appear to be smudged on the kit.

i think theyre smudged minimally on the kit or something similar, but i think these stripes could be a bit darker to match better. HotTeacher69 (talk) 08:26, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 14:07, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 17:50, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 18:59, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you give the shading some shape? I can hardly see it on the paws or face, and it seems to randomly appear in the middle of her body and on her hind legs. 11:30, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the shape just fine but maybe define the shading on the head and front legs Storm  &#9835;  20:29, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see th shape so I'm asking her to define it. 20:06, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

reups 23:44, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Fallowsong (W) ~ For Approval
Uh, so here is Fallowsong. I'm a kit for PCA rn and wanted to contribute something so here :D

Kind-of mottled light brown; please tell me if I should remove the mottles.

Autumnbright (talk) 06:10, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This needs to match the queen image. Also, this should say for evaluation. 06:43, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I matched the queen image. Thanks for rectifying errors ^.^ By the way, I uploaded another image because the old one didn't have the right name. Autumnbright (talk) 07:04, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This is really nice! Maybe blur the shading a bit? <span style="">07:08 Tue Sep 8

Re-upload: Blurred shading a tad; should I decrease opacity? Autumnbright (talk) 09:09, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I think so. 09:38, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Please darken and blur it more, add some depth, too. This is nice :) 09:57, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I added highlights and darkened shading. Tell me if it needs more blurrin', I had to redo shading so idk XD Thank you for all the encouragement so far, it means so much to me! Autumnbright (talk) 10:14, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and possibly add more shading at the haunch? 10:32, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I'm not very happy with the shading/highlights balance. T T Autumnbright (talk) 10:49, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Can you lighten the shading a tinyy bit on the midriff? 10:54, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink seems to be over blurred. Define it? 11:27, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I couldn't really do anything about the midriff shading, so any tips? I corrected earpink, its layer was deleted for some reason XD Autumnbright (talk) 11:41, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Another Re-upload: Actually, I think I figured out the lightenation (I coined a word hehe) thing for the midriff shading. Is that better? Autumnbright (talk) 11:53, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please? And since you know what you're doing here, I'll promote you into an apprentice. Now the heading can say "for approval". =) 12:15, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Defined tail shading and edited overall highlights/shadey. I feel as if the tail looks dual-coloured now tho XD And thank youuu, Burntclaw :D Autumnbright (talk) 12:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-reupload: Blended tail shading a bit because it was bothering me XD Autumnbright (talk) 12:35, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the highlight on the haunch and the shading next to it? 14:00, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload: I'm sorry if the blur isn't apparent - I'm afraid it might be too undefined if I blur it too much. 14:39, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Much better! Maybe lighten the shading a little on the neck and tail? 16:51, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the light at the base of the tail. 20:55, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Defined/lightened shading, redid shading/highlights on the tail :3 -- 10:49, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch seems a little blotchy. Try adding some more and smoothing it out. 13:04, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Is it okay if you elaborate? I really can't see the blotches you're talking about. Also, when I tried to add shading, it just made everything look, uh, uneven. Any tips? 13:43, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think with that light source the light on the front paw farthest away from us would be coming from the opposite direction it is now. 20:52, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the two legs furthest from us. 20:59, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Ugh, this is so cruddy. 03:00, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 13:23, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry but theres a patch on the back where the shading is like not the same dark as the others? And i still think the shading on the tail needs to be defined Storm  &#9835;  13:37, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me Stormsong. 16:34, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Im gonna have to agree with storm here. I can see the light patch on the back and that shouldnt be there 20:15, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Balanced out back shading as best I could (though my computer screen doesn't really want to cooperate :c) and defined shading a tad more. 21:31, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Can you actually define the light on the paws farthest from us? The shading seems to be on the wrong side 21:51, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry. And add some more shading on the back of the haunch please :) 21:51, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Turns out highlights were leaking. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll re-upload later today~ 23:27, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I lied. 23:47, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hailstar (D) - For Approval
alright...GIMP makes him look a lot more blurred than he actualy is, I'm going to fix that right now as we speak. 20:17, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere (Unless that's part of the blur thing you mentioned)  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:19, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 20:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

define shading even more; i can barely tell it's got any shading <span style="">20:39, 09/8/2015

Re-uploaded: 20:41, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the earpink. 20:54, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded: 21:14, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file? Also, the shading is leaking everywhere, and he seems too dark... 23:24, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Burntclaw, I'd love the file. Sorry you guys, this definitely isn't my best at all, I've just been a little under the weather. 00:02, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Kill me. 02:14, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? nice. 13:03, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

On the back, there is a line of unshaded area before the shading. If you don't know what I mean I can try and explain it a little better. 23:00, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 11:33, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Shit I think i lost the file, but i'll attempt to search for it again. Although I'm p sure the base is #aeaeae. That's all you /really/ need from the file, tbh. (this isn't critique just a comment) 11:51, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the main body shading. 23:59, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a tad on the front leg closest to us. 06:14, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 14:02, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 18:09, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Are highlights on the tail leaking a little into the hind paws, or is it just me? 02:58, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the front curved paw is out of place Storm  &#9835;  13:40, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 14:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Try putting the shading on the other side of the paw 14:56, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 00:21, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is now leaking onto the leg, and it's taken up the majority of the paw. Define the light on the paw please 00:35, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

whoops and can you also blur the earpink a tad more please, it looks too uniform right now 00:36, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on his right front leg 02:40, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Half Moon (Star) - For Approval
my beautiful child <span style="">20:22, 09/8/2015

...why does she get one of these? shes not in starclan. HotTeacher69 (talk) 20:27, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

jayce told me she got one (and reserved her for me, since i was on mobile / unable to access a comp, bless his soul) so ask him bc i honestly do not know?? <span style="">20:35, 09/8/2015

She's seen in StarClan at the end of PoS, therefore she gets one 22:07, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading above her right cheek. 01:40, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

i told icy this in chat but: theats her cheekbone, it's in the light; so it's like not supposed to be blurred; its actually a bit overblurred for my tastes. <span style="">01:54, 09/9/2015

That's...actually quite a bit too high to be her cheekbone... 13:12, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah i think winter is right. Feel your face. Is your cheekbone on your forehead? No its right to the side and below the eye. And yes i know its a cat and humans bonrs are different but do you really think a cats cheek is that high? Storm &#9835;  20:33, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

....first of all, I am not a child, do not speak to me like one. I misplaced the light on the face; there is no reason to speak to me like this, especially since I've been here, and doing chararts, for more than 4 years (much longer than you've been around on here). If you'd been patient, I was about to comment that yes, now that I'm more awake and can see better, I see that it's too high. whatever thooo. <span style="">20:39, 09/9/2015

ook.. blur the shading on the backside/shoulder area? <span style="">02:08 Thu Sep 10

Blur/smudge the shading on her main body? 13:08, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

thsiu is so beautiful,, can you smudge the earpink up a bit?? teach me how to shade like this. also ily <span style="">14:00 Sat Sep 12

Slate (Q) ~ CBA
I knew she would be Gray Wing's mate! All colors from the rogue. 22:19, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

the earpink seems to extend a bit far out, and can you maybe dull the scar in the places its in shadow? HotTeacher69 (talk) 23:08, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:14, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Idk, but can you maybe pick a better color fora black cat's earpink color? Colorpick from a picture of a black cat, but if not then that's fine. 01:35, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on her other images appear to be denser. This looks.. a bit sparse compared to her other images.

Reuploaded. The earpink is the same as on the rogue image. Also, she's dark gray, not black. 04:04, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

idk the eyes seem to be multicolored. 05:27, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I presume the eye colors are from the other images, but I think they could be shifted around so they don't look as Fox said.

Okay I know you color picked from her other images, but her ear pink and scar honestly look too bright for a dark coloured cat. They could be toned down a bit. 12:28, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:24, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could u lighten the shading just a bit 13:02, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:55, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

The texture looks a little sharper than the other images, maybe blur/smudge it a little. 00:02, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:33, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

maybe darken the scar more and make it less.. edgy? What i mean is that it looks like it isnt blurred, smudged or anything. (Maybe a little blurred) but it just looks plain drawn, maybe blue it a /little/ more or smudge it a /little/ more? 02:29, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:03, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 13:07, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

One-eye (kit) - For Approval


This is my first one so.. yeah. And sorry if I messed anything up.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  01:50, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the white background? 01:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but how do I do that?

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  01:50, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Do you use Photoshop? I don't know anything else. 02:09, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

No I don't use it.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  04:17, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

This appears to be uploaded as a .jpg file. As a result, there will be a white background. Try converting it to a png. Also, what program do you use? 04:20, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I tried to change it from jpg to png, but it wouldn't work. I use GIMP

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  04:39, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

File ==> Export ==> PNG. 05:26, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading seems a little pixelated, is that intended for mottling or something? Also, if the white background isn't budging after PNG-fication, select the white background with the Wand tool and, um, delete the selection. Make sure the tolerance is set so that the charart isn't selected~ Blur the earpink a bit too. This is nice, but there's always room for improvement :D 10:53, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded I fixed the shading, now how do I delete the white? there's no delete button that I can see.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  14:48, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Select the white background with the wand tool and tap 'delete' - should do the trick 15:46, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Where's the wand tool?

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  16:35, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

In GIMP (what you use, right?) it's one of the tools in the toolbox, towards the top of it - it looks like a magic wand and is called "Fuzzy Select Tool". As for the image can you define the shading a tad? Very pretty! 20:25, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded

 ~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~   21:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little bit more, please? 23:14, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  23:38, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit 04:10, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading a tad~ Also, try and blur earpink a little more? :3 13:59, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  02:21, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Aw, he's so cute. Mind defining the light on the back paw for me? 03:07, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Also, you know what you're doing so no reason why you shouldn't be promoted into an apprentice :D 03:08, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re uploaded. '''I had to delete your edt Foxy, It turned into the picture.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  13:30, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and back paw Storm  &#9835;  13:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded.

 ~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~   16:02, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Tiny Branch (Ki) ~ For Approval
tiny kit is cute 15:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Aw:3 define the light on the paws a touch? 03:17, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reups c: 15:27, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the belly/chest area? 20:16, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

The belly is covered in shading and so is most of the neck/chest, so I can't really do much about it... 20:58, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the transition from shading to...erm...non-shading, for lack of a better word? Demonic blank sizes, adorable images. Go figure.

Reups I hope this'll do the trick 14:35, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Poppydawn (A) - For Approval
- She's baaaaaccckkkkk!!! may be applied to kitteh or artist :P  All colors came from her StarClanner/Queen  05:21, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Ah, she's gorgeous :D Lighten chest/neck shading a tad? 06:06, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the pupil? It gets lost in the eye shading. I love this <3 06:12, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:26, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly im sorry but the stripes are an odd color to go with that shading. They look too light Storm  &#9835;  13:45, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think it looks alright, and she does need to match the stripe colour to the others. 14:39, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Frog (Ro. alt) - For Approval
lmao. 07:33, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can someone rename this? It's the alt... Oops. 07:46, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Eep, this is amazing~ Mottley goals :D Define main body+head shading? 08:42, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

his hind legs should be lower to match the front legs level, and the legs are a bit long. they should also be more splayed out, like briarlight. HotTeacher69 (talk) 08:55, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you give me a redline, Nub? i suck at anatomy holy shit 11:08, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

maybe something like this? (im certainly not an anatomy expert but i tried) HotTeacher69 (talk) 11:24, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks for the red line :D This looks much better 12:36, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Oh and i just realized the tail looks like a rectangle so I'll fix that in the next upload 12:40, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Might just be my computer, but there's a bit of waste above his middle-upper back. This. is. so. amazing. How. Do you. Do. This. Good. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:58, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Was that it? And thank you so much :D this is honestly one of my proudest works ever ;;  03:02, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the stripes? Storm &#9835;  13:10, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

They re the darker markings. Would you like me to define them? 13:11, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

A little bit please Storm  &#9835;  13:14, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:17, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste on the middle of the back 14:38, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

There's also some shading leaking on the front paw closer to us --Dewsplash (talk) 14:41, September 12, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash 14:41, September, 12, 2015

ok so maybe shorten and connect the hind leg line thats on his stomach, and if possible, maybe (for lack of a better word) droop the back some more? it just looks a bit too straight for a broken spine or similar. HotTeacher69 (talk) 18:37, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Cedarstar (D) ~ For Approval
Colours from the StarClan. I tried to copy the white belly blur/smudge style from the warrior. I don't think I did well with the upper part >< 23:48, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs a bit? 01:54, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 01:59, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you erase some of the shading on the ear pink? I can't see the ear pink at all. 13:19, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I just moved the ear pink layer above the shading layers. 21:45, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a looot more 23:41, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

You know, she's not required to smudge the earpink, and you don't have to put so much abbreviation that it almost feels like it's insulting her. I actually think the earpink is fine. 00:23, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't look quite natural as it is now, though. I think the edges of the ear pink could use a smudge, but nowhere near the amount that Winter is implying.

Dawnfeather (Q) ~ For Approval
lol why did I make this design so deceptively hard to match? 01:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Oh no I wanted this DX try brightening up the white? This is pretty :) 02:15, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Sorry!>.<; I actually brightened it before you mentioned it, I just hadn't gotten to upload it, and thanks (: Stupid suitemates and people on my dorm floor. Go to the bars if you want to be this obnoxious, that's why there are so many in this town -__- I hate living on a mostly junior/senior (21+) floor sometimes.   02:32, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hollypelt (W) ~ For approval
Black cats are so hard to shade XD  03:03, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light please Storm  &#9835;  13:48, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Do the highlights make her look too gray? 14:16, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

nope, they look fine. mind defining the earpink a little? i can barely see it. <span style="">19:25 Sat Sep 12

Re-ups If it needs to be more defined just ask and I'll move it above the shading. 19:45, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink should never go beliw shading unless you can partially still see the earpink, which i cannot see any of it.. imo at least 22:13, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe brighten earpink just a little so that it's more visible? 23:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups How's that? 00:11, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ember (Ro) ~ For Approval


Define facial shading? 13:18, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

not tryinh to sound all 'its fine' but i think its pretty visible, and people will be telling me to lighten it nexy. HotTeacher69 (talk) 14:24, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I think the facial shading is as good as it is now. But can you possible define the light on the tail? 14:45, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded at this stage i think this is the best balance im gonna get between the shading and the light. HotTeacher69 (talk) 18:36, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Pearnose (Star) ~ For Approval
I miss blurring I'll smooth out chest shading and perhaps thicken the dorsal stripe in the next upload if there's going to be one. don't tell me they don't match cuz I'll agree with it

Darken the stripes? 13:18, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs? 14:36, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry but this is a biiiiit too red to be dark brown 23:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Red Claw (Ro) - For Approval
much cat. very Pinestar color.