User:Raffyjack123

Mudpool is a tom with hazel eyes, shaggy gold fur, darkening with age, to the point of being light brown, with barely visible dark stripes and dark brown paws with a darker patch on his right forepaw and tipped tail.

(Thank you for the picture Hiddensun)-->

The Gathering
You weave among the undergrowth, trying to scent any sign of prey, you stop and open you're mouth to taste the air, a warm scent of mouse makes its way into your scent glands, making your mouth water. Suddenly you see a flash of brown shoot from under the bracken behind you and into the brambles ahead, you feel your paws tingle with excitement, and give chase. You race through a sandy clearing and past an ivy-coloured oak tree at the edge of it, a strange, musky odor wafts into you're nostrils, but you keep you're pace and dive through some birch ahead of you, not wanting to loose the swift-footed mouse. You hear a sudden shake in the birch you've just past and spin around to face a light brown tabby tom, he sits down at the edge of a small, sandy clearing and wraps his striped tail over his dark brown paws. You feel your back arch and lip curl, baring you're teeth, and the strange tang you scented earlier fills you're nostrils again.

"You don't need to bare your teeth," the tom began, showing no hostility in his amber gaze. You hold his gaze steadily as suspicion floods over you like a swollen river, though you feel your muscles relax and your pelt lies flat once again. You sit down on some dead leaves, still you feel weary, even though you begin to trust the brown tom.

The brown warrior puffs out his chest as he meows proudly: "I am Mudpool, of SkyClan". ''SkyClan? What's SkyClan? '''You wonder to yourself.

"Oh, I'm sorry, let me explain," the tom meowed your thoughts, unexpectedly. "Living in a clan is a great honor, you see we live in the caves of a deep gorge, over there," the brown tabby flicks his tail onwards showing the direction behind you. You turn your head to see, but you see only shrubs and tall trees.

"Behind the forest," he explains. "Mothers, called queens protect and feed there kits, when the kits reach the age of six moons, they become apprentices and when they are fully trained, they become warriors, you see? The leader has the full responsibility of looking after the clan, with a little help from the deputy, who becomes leader when the current one dies. The medicine cat treats the wounded and reads signs from our ancestors, StarClan. We have different borders as well, to mark out our territory, like the one you just crossed." Your pelt prickles with memory, as you remember the strange odor that you scented at the old oak tree. That must be a border. You think to your self wonderingly. "I'm sorry, I know this must be a lot to take in, let's take this conversation back to camp." The brown tabby hauled himself from were he was sitting, and turned-tail to disapear into the undergrowth. You quickly follow, dodging tall trees and thorned bushes along the way, you follow Mudpool down a steep slope, a river divided half of it, and a gorge lined a big sandy hollow, cats padded along busily, each doing there own differant chore. You follow Mudpool to a shallow cave, carved in a side of the gorge. "Now where were we, oh yes, I remember being a kit, learning this to, they were good times." The tom continues. His amber eyes glinted with rememberance. "Would you like to here how I got to know the Clan, like you?"

Mudpool
I was born to Heavyeye, my father and Smokespots, my mother, I was named after my grandfather on my mothers side, Mudclaw.

Not long after my birth the current deputy, and my uncle, Turtleheart died. His kits, Vinepaw and Mountainpaw and mate, Blackcloud grieved for days. The next deputy was Emberstars brother, Mosspelt. Blackcloud then mated a rogue, named Auther. Rouges have strange names, don't they. Don't tell anyone, but I think he was a kittypet before he was a rogue. Auther and Blackcloud had a kit, named Duckkit, later Duckflight when I was a warrior. Auther and Blackcloud soon broke up, and Auther was a rogue again, we never saw him after that, I think he went to Twolegplace.

A few moons after my birth I remember sneaking out of the nursery in search of the fresh-kill I'd heard so much about, at the same time marvelling at the camp around me, remember, before that all I saw was the cold, stone walls of the nursery. I faintly remember tumbling down the zigzag slope from the nursery. Eventually I found the fresh-kill pile and noticed a plump, grey mouse at the very peak of the fresh-kill pile, I thought I could get it, so, I started scrambling to the top. It was a while before I reached the mouse, but at that very moment the pile falls, along with me!" Mudpool's eyes glowed with amusement, and his tail twitched joyfully. "After that I remember being teased by the older apprentices, they said things like "Having fun wrestling with a mouse, looks like it's winning!" and "What a dangerous enemy, a mouse!" Soon I tucked in to the fresh-kill, and then I choke on a small bone, just my luck! I almost died! After I was raced to the medicine cat's den and, with Laurelpelt's help,I was freed of that little pesky shoulder bone. All that just because I overheard my mother talking about a measly fresh kill pile!" Can you believe it!?

After a few moons I remember playing in the nursery with Nightkit, she's Darkwillow and Burnfur's kit, and Widenose's sister. I dislocated a shoulder and. . . I was in the medicine cats den again. With a few painful yelps, my shoulder was fully recovered. Actually, now that I think about it, Laurelpelt has saved me many times over.

After a while I was given my apprentice name, Mudpaw. And my mentor was, my grandfather and the leader, Emberstar. On my first hunting trip I was walking in the forest with my newly appointed mentor when a rabbit sped from the bushes behind and into the shrubs in front. Immediately, I darted after the big rabbit, twice the size then I was, might I add. I eventually caught it. My mentor was so proud, and so was I.

I remember catching a mouse on a hunting patrol, with Steamfur and my friends, Dimpaw and Fishpaw, his brother, but don't get him wrong, with a name like Dimpaw you'd think he's a dreary kind of cat, but believe me, he's not. On the way back to camp a massive rouge launched right on top of me, I don't no why, though. I tried to fight the massive dark tabby tom but he was way to big! Remember I only a newly appointed apprentice. Steamfur and the other apprentices saved me, and together we drove him of.

Dimpaw and Fishpaw came back from a hunting trip one day, when they were'nt meant to be hunting at all. Fishpaw had a massive, bloody scratch running from his cheek, over one eye and through his ear, ripping it in half. Laurelpelt saved him, barely. Apparently a fox attacked them. What made it worse was that on the same day his warrior ceremony was to take place, and as Laurelpelt saved him, the warrior ceremony went on. As he didn't follow his leaders orders, Emberstar named him Scareface, with his brother being Dimpelt. I remember being flooded with shock, more than you can imagine.

My warrior ceremony came after the brothers, but before Nightflowers. Oh, sorry, you know her as Blackpaw, don't you. After boasting a little that I would my his warrior name to the kits, even though I no I shouldn't have, I remember saying things like: "Yeah, its probably going to be something like Mudwhisker, because, you know I'm good at tracking. Or Mudtooth because I'm great at hunting!" When the warrior ceremony finally came, my name was Mudpool, for my "''bravery and loyalty". ''I remember seeing glowing pride in my leader's eyes, though I heard a few chuckles from the kits, I tried to ignore them, but, after boasting, I suppose I deserved it.

More coming soon

Me!
Name: Raffy (Thats all youre getting of my name :D)

Age: Not gonna tell....

Location: UK

Pets: Harryet-(Harry until we found out she was a girl!) brown-and-white Hampster ( :-( died many years ago)

Barney-Golden doodle (now lives with my family friend)

Bailey-Brilliant brown cockerspaniel with gold muzzle, paws, eyebrows and tipped tail. With a white dash on his chest.

Favourite Colours: Bright Red :)

Favourite Animals: Cats, dogs, Tigers and Wolvorines

Stuff I Was  Into
Pokemon-Loved making up my own when I was younger and pretending I was one in the playground!

Yu-Gi-Oh-Loved the GX stuff and the cards

Avatar: The Legend Of Aang-Loved the cartoons and making my own charactors!

Avatar (the movie)-Still think its awesome!

Lion King- :s

Dairy of a Wimpy Kid-Great kid books!

Mudpool
He's me as a warrior! All the stuff that happened to him actually happened to me (in human version lol :D )

(In no particular order)
Stonefur-Sacriffice (:'-o) Think about it. If he didn't save Feathertail and Stormfur-NO TRIBE!!!...and diffarent cats for the great jorney!!!

Onewhisker-Loyal to his clan and a great friend :D

Brambleclaw-Going to make a great leader!...hopefully...actually, NO. But I still love him!

Lionheart-Would of made a great leader :'(

Whitestorm-Fought to his death for the good of his clan...SO SAD lol

Greystripe-Got'ta love him!

Stormfur-Strong and brave! One day he should be leader!!!

Rainfur-I love that cat...not sure why though :-s

Sharpclaw-Hes coooool

Leafdapple-Great great leader!

Echosong-GREAT NAME!

Brackenfur-Loyal!!!

Brightheart-Loyal...again

Thornclaw-I do love me a good Thornclaw!!

Cinderpelt-Love her. lol

(In no particular order)
Hawkfrost-I know its in the genes and everything, but seriously. YOU'RE A SECOND TIGERSTAR!!!

Tigerstar-MURDERER!!! lol.

Brokenstar-EEEVVIILLL.

Lizardstripe-Your the one that made Brokenstar evil...I hate you.

Thistleclaw-Don't make another Tigerstar...pleeaasee >:(

Socks/Ruby-You two are the ones that made Scourge evil...GRRR.

Scourge-Youve just got'ta hate SCOURGE!!!

Darkstripe-MANIAC!!!

Snake/Ice-God I hate them sooooooooo much!!!!!

Bone-EVIL SCOURGE-LOVIN' PIECE OF FOX DUNG!!!!!!!

Blackstar-Stonefur killer!!!...I loved Stonefur...*sobs*

Theories
Brackenfur, Brightheart, Thornclaw and Cinderpelt are Lionheart's kits.

Stormfur and Brook will have kits.

RiverClan:
Leader: Mistystar

Wise, kind, respected and a little hot-headed, much like her mother-Bluestar.

Deputy: Reedwhisker

Caring, calm and assertive, the only surviving kit of the current leader of RiverClan-Mistystar.

ShadowClan:
Leader: Russetstar ''' OMG!!!! SHE DIED!!! . . . urm. . . maybe Tawnystar or Rowenstar then???'''

Arrogant, single-minded, quick-to-act, and tempered easily, much like Blackstar, her preceded leader.

Deputy: Tigerheart

Brave, Loyal and strong, often stepping-in if his leader's been a little to aggressive, the opposite of his grandfather-Tigerstar.

WindClan:
Leader: Ashstar

Even-tempered, wise and fair-a strong leader.

Deputy: Crowfeather

Determined and unwilling to show weakness, though no cat can judge his loyalty, much like his mentor-Mudclaw (But a bit better :P. In A Clan In Need he is seen trying to climb the Great Rock, wanting to be a leader, it has to be!!!)

More coming shortly

Sign if you want to be friends :)
I'll be your friend!

20:14, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

 N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     22:20, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hello. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:22, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry it has taken me a while to reply! Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:34, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Hooha! Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  13:11, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Hi! Cl a  ra  12:49, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Icy is so smart that she dares to sign this list. ;) Ice Spring is here! 00:05, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

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