Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Crowfeather (W) - Redone
next on: splook can't match things worth crap. Most recent OA was me. redone for smoke things. 19:14 Sat Sep 14

go here for the changes:  19:16 Sat Sep 14

I like it but the coloring is far too dark, could you lighten it? Or if it's the shading, could lighten you that instead? The texture also doesn't look like the loner image/app image's textures. (God, I'm not that good at chararts and look at me - criticizing an experienced user's work xD)

Would you like the.xcf? 19:35 Sat Sep 14

Reuploaded. I lightened him up a bit so you can see the texture a bit better, let me know if it still needs to be improved. Raven: if I end up struggling quite a bit with the colors, I'll ask you for it. Thanks! :) 22:04 Sun Sep 15

I find it doesn't really match the loner well, as the texture seems off. 00:29, September 16, 2013 (UTC)

Ah, let's not try and be offensive. x.x If it doesn't match, perhaps provide Splook with a suggestion to how you think it could match better, or something along those lines. Just saying it seems off doesn't really tell her exactly how.

Oh, sorry. Didn't mean to be offensive, but try to make the texture a tad more pixel-y and make it kind of grid-like. In other words, sharpen it. Sorry if I was unclear before. Also, spread the texture all around the image. 20:49, September 16, 2013 (UTC)

It wasn't really an offensive, comment. Hawk just saying that it didn't really match the loner, and we've all said something like that... Anyways, can you define the leg shading? He looks really awesome 8D

Reuploaded. I tried just sharpening the texture. Let me know if I should just redo it? Sorry for the delay. 15:35 Sat Sep 21

Quailheart (W) - Redone
Redone due to multiple reasons, oa was me. Comments? 00:35 Sun Sep 15

Oooh...Nice textures Raven! I think you should tone down the highlights on the shoulder just a little and blur spots a bit.

Re-uploaded, There is no highlights on the shoulder, just my shading in which I quite like this way. Also I only touched the spots a little with the smudge tool, just to make them flow a little. 09:43 Mon Sep 16

Oh, sorry. I really like it! It has good shading, neat spots and a elegant texture.

Oh my god, this is amazing~ However, I don't mean to be a downer, but the light source doesn't really make sense. I don't know what parts the light is hitting on and from where. Could you fix that, if you'd like. (I don't mean to sound offensive, if I do. x.x)

Re-ups 00:09 Sat Sep 21

Talon (CG) - Redone
OA was me. Redone because for so many reasons.... Comments? 02:35, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shadng. 05:40, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:22, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

The tabby stripes seem to fade away on <<<this shoulder. Sexy~ 21:44, September 19, 2013 (UTC)


 * There's a mud streak there 21:45, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

He looks a wee bit purple. ouo Maybe darken the tint or shift it on the color scale? He be smexy.

Re-uploaed Dwaaawwww.... Talon can't be a petty purple pony-kitty? 02:01, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

Can you maybe define the mud streaks? It sort of looks like there's none. Still sexy~ 15:27, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:04, September 21, 2013 (UTC)

Could you crop the image, if you don't mind? 15:40, September 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:53, September 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define the mudstreaks. This is beautiful

Quailheart (Star) - Redone
Redone for same reasons as warrior. Comments? 00:10 Sat Sep 21

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
OA be Rainface, with a tweak (??) from Jenrock, and another from Shoon. All colors match the other images.

Define the shading on the tail and legs. Dem eyes are glow in the dark. *o* *Steals*