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Thrushtalon (W) - CBA
I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-; 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me. 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups The shading looks wwwwaaaaayyyyyyyy better, /not  19:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the shading some 20:46, 03/25/2015

re-up 21:10, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the stripes on the haunch on under his neck/chest; he's starting to toe the line of triangle tabby. Also, blur and lighten the shading on the back 21:11, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could lower the shading's opacity as well, because I can't see the stripes at all through it. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up re-did him and made him a mackerel tabby. Dont know if it was the right choice... 02:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and blur it more. You can try secondary shading as well but it's just a suggestion. 02:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I should darken the shading more '-' 02:41, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit? I <3 his stripes. 02:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also, can you smudge/blur the stripes a bit, too? 03:03, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the legs a tad 20:38 Sun Mar 29

re-up Did I answer everyone's questions? 01:53, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit more, it's still kind of hard edged. 13:27, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, honestly. Could you smudge the stripes a bit more? This is looking very nice!! 17:17, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna have to agree with Tiger, just blur/smudge the shading a bit more. 00:15, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on the legs. 04:39, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

still needs blurring, and the stripe by his ear is really hard edged. 11:46, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I think he looks a little better. Changed the eyes to green because I think he looks sexier that way. 21:17, April 3, 2015 (UTC) x2 I dont know why the stripes look so hard edge on the wiki '-' My GIMP Says it's perfectly stripe like.. 21:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading and the eye depth, please. 23:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Merp? 13:15, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yo the shading looks really nice! Now define the shading on his back right paw, and add a few more stripes to the head. 14:34, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

You could smudge the thicker darker stripes on the tail. Spottehwobble!

I think the stripes are fine. And Spotted, if you are doing big text, end it with please. 23:54, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

So do I have to do what Foxy suggests on the stripes or... Leave it how it is? Im a little confused 3x 15:39, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-up on the shading, dont know 'bout the stripes... 15:44, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light in the front paw farthest from us and smudge some of the stripes a tad more on the tail. Lovely. :) 00:01, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Is there a way you could make the base a bit more of a warmer brown? He kinda looks just the slightest bit green- nothing too much. Just the tiniest bit more towards orange I think would do the trick. Perhaps around the shade of #9E7D5E?

Add more stripes to the head. 12:59, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I add about the same amount of stripes to my warrior images, and countless others have no more than an M or W stripe- tbh, I think the amount of stripes on the head is perfectly fine.

re-up looks iccky. ): 14:39, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, it doesn't. I think it looks phenomenal, hence why I'm going to CBA it.

Spiketail (D) ~ CBA
Welp... first charart. Hopefully I don't chicken out or get arrogant and I didn't screw anything up /)-(\  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:45, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the pupils/eye color? I can't see any at all, and he needs to have them. Also, darken his base just a bit, and blur the main body shading a tad.

blur the shading a lot, and make the light on the bent leg more visible 11:35 Wed Mar 25

There is waste under at the outside of his chest. Pretty goood for your first one! 19:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed eye colour, redid with a darker grey. Eye colour was originally supposed to be grey until my lesson learned: Never put grey eyes on a grey cat. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Realized I messed up on shading. I'll start work on it tomorrow when I wake up or after I get home from the hospital. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:41, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Add pupils, if you want to look at examples, you can look at some of mine. 04:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added pupils (who ever knew eyes could be so difficult? I need new glasses). Might as well do this before I sleep since it's fast. Thank you for the examples, Foxy :) -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

You're welcome! If you need help you can always ask me. :) Now, just darken and define the shading and define the eye depth. We're getting there and he looks awesome. 10:49, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Is it okay if I can get a recommendation on what to set the blur rate to? I use Gaussian Blur on gimp. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:29, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, it depends on the blanks. I used to make 25 my very maximum for any blank, before I started smudging instead. Try stuff out, see how it looks. Gaussian blur tends to make look flat or occasionally blotchy, though. Try using the blur tool on a high rate if you have trouble finding a good setting for guassian blur. 18:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere Russettail13 (talk) 02:09, March 28, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Could I get some assistance on trying to shade in GIMP? I know, it sounds stupid but somehow, GIMP just doesn't want me to shade correctly anymore. I tried using the smudge tool (though I suck at smudging), I tried using the blur tool, and I even tried using gaussian blur. For gaussian blur, the option was greyed out. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Try a hard edged blur tool and blur the edges only at a rate of 100, make sure the mode is RGB. It you would like I could make a tutorial for you. I suggest not using the smudge tool until you have more practice. However if you do decide to use it use a hard edged smudge tool at the rate of 60 depending on how much you want it smudged and smudge the shading towards the direction of fur. Sigh with ~ please. 03:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dang it! I forgot, thank you for reminding me. That's what I get for being sleepy. I'll try, but if it doesn't succeed, I'll redo the image. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded After getting SkyClan's Destiny, munching on some candy, and finding my glasses, I finally found out why it wouldn't shade. It wasn't on RGB. Sorry if there seems to be a lack of change. I set gaussian blur to 20 and made the eyes brighter. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:40, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit more.

Reuploaded I have an uneasy feeling that I blurred too much, since I'm not sure if I can really see the shading, but I could be wrong. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:28, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I might give this a thorough check again. I bumped down the blurring rate to about 27.5 ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:19, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bumped it down to 26. Still using Gaussian Blur because I'm lazy. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:27, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bumped it down to 24. Didn't like it at 26. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:24, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading quite a bit. 10:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took shading down to about 23 or 22. I spy a bit of waste so I'll get at that immediately. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bye bye, waste. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:54, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

No, I meant make it more visible, not less visible. I can't see the shading right now. 23:42, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I had a hard day and can't think >< I can't even remember to stop aligning the image. I feel stupid.

Reuploaded Hopefully this bad day doesn't stretch on for me. Anyway, I blurred and adjusted a bit. At first I thought I didn't see the shading, but it was because of my glasses. I'm still pretty unsure though. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:11, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Its fine, everyone makes mistakes now and again. As for the image, define the foreleg shading. You did beautifully on this Skid. =) 01:41, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :D (I hope the changes are showing)

Darken the shading quite a bit. 04:34, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried not to darken too much because for me, a little goes a long way. one of my last uploads before chicago.

Darken or define the shading just a little more? 20:50, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded hopefully it shows the changes... Redid shading since I lost the other file.

Darken the shading more 06:29, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Since you clearly know what your doing, im changing the heading and promoting you to an apprentice. As for the image, define the overall shading- i can barely see it. 20:22, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't really think it needs defining, just darkening. 20:46 Fri Apr 3

Reuploaded Is this too much? I want to make sure I have just the right amount of shading.

define the shading on the legs 06:38, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

You could define the shading everywhere but the flanks. ~Spotted

Reuploaded I still am sort of fretting that this might be a bit too much of shading. In my next upload, I'll lighten some of the shading.

Dull down the ear pink 03:25, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lost my save so I'll have to redo the shading again. I got the earpink though. I have a headache so I wanted to get this done as soon as possible.

Reuploaded Added shading to the hind feet, not sure if it's my computer screen or not because I tried defining the leg shading and I don't know if I can see it.

Reuploaded Shading darkened some more. Too dark?

CBA? 22:34, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W) - Declined
Sorry for not posting sooner I just got a new lap top and had to redo some stuffs. Anywho, here's Midgey. 11:49, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

he needs patches in his fur. 11:50, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the eyes...? All I see is the default area- did you forget to give him pupils and such?

Reups Oh my xD how could I miss the eyes if all things? 12:30, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There are still no pupils, also define the tail shading 13:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I reupped the wrong one lel. I added the defined shading though (this time I chose the right one xD) 14:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

where's yer light source? the haunch says one way, the chest says the other 21:40, 03/26/2015

Define the light on the legs, please, as well as the shading on the head. 22:46, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 17:27, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the neck shading a tad? 00:21, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

i can see it fine, to be honest 11:51 Mon Mar 30

Define the light on the tail and the back legs. 14:38, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:00, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 04:31, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 00:44, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Oh yeah I'll reup when I get to school sorry 10:25, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I have to decline this due to a lack of work- it's one week without uploads, sorry.

Seedpelt (Alt W) ~ CBA
idk 17:15 Sat Mar 28

Weren't she and the other Seedpelt said to be the same cat? And if so, shouldn't she match the other Seedpelt's description? 17:34, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

it would be an alt now, it should just be renamed and it'll be fine. 17:42, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-named. Also, brighten up the white a bit on the muzzle and tail.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I remember that alts had to match the normal images in terms of fur length, so, shouldn't this be short-furred, like the other image. 23:13, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/Smudge the white more and define the earpink. 23:55, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't Seedpelt match her new description? 03:54, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

this is an alt, not the warrior. 03:55, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more, it's a bit hard edged. 14:11, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

practically redid it the reason it didn't match the normal image before is because i didn't see that they were the same cat. 18:10 Sun Mar 29

Can you blur the shading a bit more? 20:31, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

it looks fine to me, but if someone else agrees then i will its smudged not blurred 21:16 Sun Mar 29

I'm gonna agree with Tiger here. Please smudge it, if you don't blur it. 21:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs while your at it. 02:39, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more 04:37, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

reups i should probably smudge the neck shading anymore but eh i'll probably be told to do it anyway 11:38 Mon Mar 30

Define the tail shading and smudge the shading a lot on the haunch. Smudge the white towards the direction of fur. 14:34, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

reups 01:21 Wed Apr 1

Define the ear pink just a little, and he looks a tad greenish. 04:29, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up that brown a lot. The description is light brown-and white. This even borders on a darker neutral brown.

Smooth out the shading on the main body, a bit. 20:48, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

reups seedpelt is a female btw 21:07 Wed Apr 1

Shouldn't you be using the male blank? The allegiances listed her as a male, not a female. 12:03, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

well i was told to match the female gender but i can change that if i have to. 03:43 Fri Apr 3

Well Mosskit's alt is a male cause she was called one. Seedpelt was also called a male along with her description. I think you should really tweak it into a male blank. 03:49, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, especially on the haunch. 09:02, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

reups 11:50 Fri Apr 3

Define the ear pink 14:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">22:13 Sun Apr 5

Few ayswithout comments, CBA? 06:38, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Ambermoon (W) ~ For Approval
I'll redo the shading if it's really as crappy as I think it is. I'll probably also smudge the stripes a bit more if needed. 14:27, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sweet! Smooth out the shading a bit. Oh and maybe blur the stripes? 17:06, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'll smude the stripes instead, and I'll redo the painful shading. 01:38, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks fine, but you should smudge it in the direction of the fur. <span style="">11:37 Thu Apr 2

I agree with Sunstream, please smooth out the shading. 12:01, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle hole :3 20:06, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Ouch! Painful mistake now that I've been doing chararts so often and I still forget to remove the triangle XP I do have a problem though, I'm in Zhuhai so my computer doesn't have gimp. I'll download it and redo the entire thing. 03:18, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 05:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more 06:19, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Still working, Bramble? 08:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-upsYep... sorry for the delay just got back from my vacation trip, and don't even talk about my computer's crappiness. 09:45, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and define the light on the paws- I'm having a rough time telling the pale parts from the main pelt.

this? 10:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why are there two of them? >.> 10:23, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

All you really have to do is edit the section and say reuploaded, tbh. You don't have to add another image in or anything of the sort- the section automatically updates with the new version once you upload it to the file... idk why it aligns it or adds a second one.

I think it looks lovely :) StormSongz (talk) 15:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Alderpaw (App) ~ For Approval
I am incredibly proud of this. =3 01:27, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the light on the back leg. 09:18, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

the stripes seem to get lost in the shading, define them or something? 11:41, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:48, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on his right back paw and the shading depth 09:09, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading? lookin nice <span style="">20:50 Fri Apr 3

Thanks 23:04, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on our right back leg? So cute. 15:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad, his stripes are still getting lost in it. 00:01, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

^-^ I can't lighten it any more or it'll look a bit odd 21:58, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 09:34, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gonna be real picky here and I'm so sorry, but it's something that I know I've been told about countless times. Could you make the ear pink less neon red? Other than that, I quite like this image. *.*

Spikefur (W) - CBA
All colors from the apprenice, which I'm the OA of. I can't remember, but I think that the shading opacity is the same as the apprentice as well. Comments? 12:41, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading- don't care if you blur it or smudge it. (not sure of your style tbh)

Reuploaded. Btw, I always blur my shading. 20:27, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink not cover the whole inside of the ear? Love that face 😃.

23:24, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! 23:49, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading and smooth it out on the main body 10:40, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up the shading a lot and define your light source <span style="">11:52 Fri Apr 3

I think it's fine on both accounts; I use this same shading before (on Lionblaze's warrior alt before it was tweaked). However, I'll change it if someone else agrees. 12:26, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Imo, the shading looks fine. 13:53, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with burnt clW, please smooth it out 14:08, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:01, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I forgot to get rid of the waste from when I blurred it. 20:03, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the neck shading? he's nice <span style="">20:50 Fri Apr 3

Add some more light to his legs maybe? 21:18, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Give the tail shading a blur 06:39, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:05, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 02:51, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting the CBA, but I think the shading could use some smoothing out 12:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice. First time a forgot about the waste (again). 20:09, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Shall we go CBA again?

Lilyheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Not happy with these stripes :/ 03:06, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading. 03:14, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know but she seems a little lighter than her other images? It could be the use of highlights though. Also, I think the stripes are thicker and less dense on her other images. 03:45, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

If you can see here- http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Lilyheart.warrior.png - she has some gold highlights on her face and sides. Can you add those in? 13:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups They were already in, under the darker stripes, so I can't add them. I used the warrior image for reference, sooo... sorry :/ And my images always seem to look lighter, it's just the highlights. 16:50, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

the belly looks pretty grey, lighten the shading up a tad? she's pretty <span style="">20:51 Fri Apr 3

reuploaded 23:13, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 05:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading that is between the back and the belly gives the stomach a lumpy look. Could you remove it please? I'm so sorry you can totally ignore me if you want <span style="">23:21 Sun Apr 5

Still working, Shinx? Four days is good enough of a time to ask and I know you appreciate reminders.

yeeeep, I was sick for a couple days and didn't really get on the computer, sorry. 08:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think all her apprentice and her warrior need to be tweaked, as she has white patches, it's shown on her kit but not on the others. Having a white underbelly + chest doesn't really indicate patches. Could you add them, please? 09:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Nominate it first, please. Then you can ask Shinx to add the patches.

Nomination is up 10:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Grassheart (Q) - CBA
Okay, I'm trying a tabby now This looks pretty bad. 12:27, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

You have to match this image. 12:47, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

This is great for your first tabby! Straighten some of the stripes, fix the ones on the head and it will be moving in the right direction. I love the fur behind the stripes...you don't want to see my first tabby... 13:47, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I tried to match her. I actually color-picked for the base color and earpink and tried to match the eye color. I think the issue is the stripes. I changed their color in an attempt to match the apprentice, and made them a little less smudged. I'm hesitant to change the head stripes, as they were done to match the apprentice, but thanks, Sunstream. I will re-up when I get the chance. 14:33, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

There is a layer of texture under the stripes, from what I can tell. For the stripes, I suggest them to flow with the curve of the body, especially the ones on her back, also, make them a tad denser to match the apprentice. 14:38, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Idk what you're talking about, there's no texture, but I did work on the stripes 16:38, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a tiny bit? They give it a furry like affect. You use GIMP, right? 16:54, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Yes, I use GIMP. And I smudge my stripes, so I smudged them some more instead. And I really don't want to blur or smudge them any more, as they aren't particularly blurred/smudged on Grassheart's apprentice. 18:25, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

What Burnt meant was there is supposed to be a layer of texture underneath the stripes on this image, since there appears to be one on the apprentice image. 18:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Oh, that makes perfect sense! I feel so stupid that I didn't realize what Burntclaw meant. I have now added a layer of texture. 20:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the texture? and maybe blur the tail shading a bit <span style="">21:12 Fri Apr 3

Re-upped 00:15, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the neck? 00:26, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I hope I got the right spot. 00:46, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

The texture is sharper on her apprentice image. Try using an airbrush on a darker color and run it over the image until it looks like texture. If you don't want to do that use a 1px pencil and run lines over your image, then use a 1px or 2px hard edged smudge tool and smudge them towards the direction of fur. 02:40, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! I tried using the airbrush method, so hopefully you can see the texture better. 14:42, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Ice, this is beautiful :) define the shading on the tail 06:27, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out shading on the stomach. 07:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! =) 14:00, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes nearing the top of the tail curve a bit more with the shape? It looks a bit to straight considering the lineart is bending at that certain spot. If you dont know where im talking about, i can try to provide you with a screenshot? 08:55, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped No, I'm pretty sure I got the right spot, tell me though if I didn't. 20:22, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Larkkit (K) ~ For Approval
Decided to do it. How do you? c: If something is wrong - write. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

P.s – Somehow, all the time want to call Larkwing.

Ok, a few things. First, please sign your posts with ~ so we know who you are. Also, don't align your images. I fixed the alignment for you, but for future reference, don't add the |left after the image. Also, the file should be named Larkkit.kit.png, so can someone fix that? As for the image, it's pretty good but define the shading and dull down the earpink. Also, I'm pretty sure he should have a black nose, as he's a black cat. 16:17, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Sorry, but I didn't understand (translator) about the signature and the left side. May you explain slightly in a different way? But I nevertheless understood some and corrected. So?

I'm really bad at explaining but I'll try. For the signature: add ~ after what you write to sign. For the image: your code should read instead of. And on the image, please dull the earpink a bit more. 17:23, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Next day I will make more dark earpink. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink after you dull it please? 17:39, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I updated. It is already possible to lay out? Сияние Кометы 12:46, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading just a little? I like this. 13:37, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – What does "Define the shading just a little" mean? Sorry, but I didn't understand. ShineStar 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's making the shading more visible, which I think you could still do 14:18, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – And how so to make? ShineStar 15:12, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Shading black cats is hard. What art program do you use? 16:17, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I use the GIMP program. ShineStar 16:22, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, tail, and the right side og the body. <span style="">11:39 Mon Apr 6

Re-uploaded – It has to be so shaded? ShineStar 15:32, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blue/smudge the shading and blur the ear pink on -> this side just a tttiinyy bit. 13:01, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded –  What, Brambleshade? <font style="color: #99adff">ShineStar 16:17, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

In my opinion, though I am not in PCA, I think you should brighten the earpink as little is possible. Spott ehw ob bl e ''' It's   Lemon    scented!

I think the earpink is alright. 23:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose coloring? Black cats should have a really dark gray (like almost black) or black nose... I think. I remember asking about the nose thing once and got told it didn't need to be pure black.

Yarrowpaw (A) ~ For Approval
beep boop 17:07, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He looks brown, not ginger, so can you adjust the base color? Nice image, though! =) 17:14, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! I think the stripes are still good but I can change them if need be  17:21, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He honestly still looks really brown, could you make him more ginger? 17:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Imo he looks ginger, it's just the shading. Can you lighten up the shading a bit? 17:36, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If I adjust the base more, he'll look too yellow-greenish, so I played around with the shading color a little + lightened it. 17:36, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks pretty yellow. Make the base more orange, and then use a warm color for shading to keep it looking rad. 18:00, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face? I think this is very nice, Well done. 06:24, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

He looks golden not ginger... Russettail13 (talk) 13:33, April 5, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Bring it more towards an orange-red, like a sunset. You could probably color pick from Firestar or something to get an idea. 17:11, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

You could blur/smudge the stripes a little. They look a bit solid. Spott ehw ob bl e  It's   Lemon    scented!

Re-uploaded. Alright, much better. The stripes are fine, I'm not blurring them. 00:24, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Didn't look orange enough. 00:45, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Evaluation
Here's Dewy! All colorpicked from Dewpaw Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 23:16, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. 23:47, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

There are a lot of uncolored spots; fill them in, please. Also, define the shading and earpink. 00:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

In addition, there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. 00:03, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you're using the right sized blank. Did you grab it from the PCA main page? 04:36, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

If you need the right blank size, you could find it :)

There is a greenish spot on his haunch or something, you're going to have to do something about it. 13:32, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

@Scarletwind I used the male long-furred warrior blank. @Icebreeze and Foxy I'll fix it. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 13:43, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

What Scar means is that you've used the wrong sized blank. Go to the link Skid posted, right click on that image, save it, and use that to redo the image. 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

There's also waste in the part between the third and fourth chest tufts. 14:53, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fix the lighting on him. What program do you use? Also, isint he suppost to have a white belly/chest? 15:19, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I use PAINT.NET for all my images. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 17:31, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using layers? Everything seems to be blurred together. 08:18, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Well, in the new image I am creating (because of the wrong-sized blank), my layers in order from bottom to top are: Background Color, White-Gray Patches, Lineart + Eyes, Shading, and Earpink.

Ah, I think you should put the shading and earpink before the lineart. :) 21:50, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you fill in the un-colored parts around the outer edge? And there is some waste at the upper and outer edge of the tail, from what I see. Spott ehw ob bl e  It's   Lemon    scented

BTW I'm working on the new Dewnose, don't worry about any waste or etc. from this previous image. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups - *sighs heavily* :3 Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:23, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the white on the belly more visible? I can't see it.

You forgot to delete the part in between the belly and paws. It's not part of his belly! StormSongz (talk) 22:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)StormSongz

Define the light on the legs, please. 23:50, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest putting the white on another layer instead, that might the be the reason why it's turning out to look grey. 00:13, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Stonetooth (TAQ) (W) ~ For Approval
My first white cat.

Define the shading on the tail a tad 07:21, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~

Define the head shading a bit? Lovely job! 17:09, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

blur the tail shading a little? mostly where it meets the base of the tail 21:04, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Milkweed (Q) - For Approval
Gah, I cannot get that shading to work. Any suggestions? The tabby bits are find, it's the black splotches that I can't seem to shade properly. Also, she was described as a splotched black-and-ginger tabby from what I heard, so I decided to make her a ginger tabby with black splotches, because that's what some tortoiseshell cats look like. It seemed to fit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we find the cite first? Anyways, try to smudge the patches more. 02:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

page is up, she needs a torn eartip, black muzzle, and a scar on her muzzle. 08:42, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged patches more, tweaked shading (still not happy with it), and added what Skt said. Any more suggestions on fixing the shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:38, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

THat is amazing! I couldn't do that, but can you smudge the shading on the tail and define the shading a tad on her face? Spott ehw ob bl e  It's   Lemon    scented!

Also maybe blend the scar into her fur more? It looks too sharp. 21:40, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Are the black lines texture or something if so they can be smudged 00:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

What black lines? She has black markings overtop of her ginger fur, and tabby stripes. There's no texture anywhere on her. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:30, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Gosh sorry, I should have explained. It looks a little like texture, (doing my best to explain) and they are dark lines running over the direction of fur. If you think its fine ignore me. Sorry Jayie. 00:33, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The dark lines are actual markings of the fur, not texture. I tweaked the scar, tweaked the shading, and gave her the amber eyes she's supposed to have. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:26, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm having a really hard time seeing the shading, could you define it for me? I actually didn't notice there was shading at first oops

Patchkit (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
Poor kit ;___; 02:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the white up a bit. Pretty cute for being...deceased. ;_; Nice job! 17:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

You can clearly tell its white tbh. It doesn't need to be pure white 00:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

There is little I can do, honestly. It's one tick off of pure white, and if I lighten up the shading, it won't show up on the ginger too well, and I like how the shading darkness it now, so I'd rather not touch it. 00:09, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Make it pure white. I don't know what people have against using it, but it's more than acceptable and lessens the chance of it being gray. Or perhaps add some faint highlights on the white.

Re-upped Oh no, it's not that I'm against using it. It's just that I color picked off his kit image, that's why it's off. I actually always use pure white unless there is a image to match- Now it's pure white, so it shouldn't look too dark. 07:50, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

that's bcause he has very slight texture, I used pure white for the base. I always do. 07:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I added texture 08:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think the ginger patch along his back/shoulder would extend a bit further down and go closer to his neck and the lineart where the leg starts. I also think the ginger on --> paw should be extended a fair bit- it looks like there's only a small part of the foot and barely anything else on that part that's got white on it. I think it could possibly be extended to the elbow-area... I'm looking at the kit image, and it appears to do that on David's image. Unless my eyes are tired? idk

Hollytuft (W) - CBA
I forgot how hard black cats are to shade. 10:41, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading to the back right paw and the front right paw. :) Cute <3 13:03, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! 16:46, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? Nice work! 21:01, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

For black cats, it would be nice to add in some highlights. Just sayin'. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:24, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:39, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a bit and I think you could probably blur it too- my monitor is showing that blocky shading that happens when the pelt clashes with the shading too much. It's not you, persay. I think it's my monitor, but I've found that tweaking the shading darkness usually fixes it.

Re-uploaded. 22:00, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

I can see nothing wrong with this, she matches the other images, and the shading looks super awesome. CBA?

Juniperpaw (A) - For Approval
shading black cats is a pain 21:20, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading just a tad Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:35, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:39, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (ro) ~ for approval
i have returned 22:03, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tortie parts. 22:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

She has tortoiseshell splotches, which I believe is something like this? 00:02, April 8, 2015 (UTC) Maybe a bit more patchy? User: Dewdrops25:45, April, 7, 2015

I think the splotches on the tortoiseshell were meant to be on the tortie part? I'd like a second opinion on that ;;; 01:19, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

splotchy could just mean messy looking, it doesn't have to be tortoisehsll patches. 03:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, the quote was "her tortoiseshell splotches...." 03:13, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think if that's what the quote says, you should probably match that. I changed Alder when she was called splotchy, so it's only fair to change this to match what the quote says. Judging by the quote, it sounds like a white base with tortie patches and stuff... kinda like Sweetpaw.

Pink Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ohlook. <span style="">22:32 Tue Apr 7

I think the white needs to be brightened quite a bit. He looks too...yellow? StormSongz (talk) 22:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

the white is fine, actually. nice job, hawky <span style="">23:16, 04/7/2015 Looks great. If you need to, define shading. User talk: Dewdrops66/talk > 25:23, 04/7/2015

Hawky, Perchpaw isn't archived. I'll archive it this time, but if you post something without waiting again, it will be declined on the spot. 00:05, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

can you maybe layer some blue over his eyes? from what I know albinistic cats have blue eyes that look red, not just red. 03:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
hello. 01:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smothen the shading on the tail maybe? Lovely Breezy 01:52, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to be honest. I think if she smoothed it out she would be told to define it 04:00, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Bramble. It could be smoothed out. while you're at it, smudge the earpink a bit more 09:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Fern (Ro) ~ For Approval
03:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Waste right next to the chest. Lovely job David^^ 03:34, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded huh thought I got all of it but apparently not, thanks though 04:59, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Minnow (R) ~ For Approval
I'm trying something new for me so paws crossed it works. 03:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur or smudge the gray 03:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I also defined the texture, cause you couldn't really see it. 06:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot, please.

Blur the gray more and define the shading more 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can't see it. misread fox's comment at first, didn't notice the last bit 10:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (Alt. W2) - For Approval
04:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Slash (Alt Ro) - For Approval
I took the gray as a partial of gray tabby (and gave him everything else he was cited for since it is part of his description) since I think we operate like that with normal descriptions...idk about you, but writing tabby all the time would get tedious and redundant.

Re-uploaded. David suggesting erasing the whiskers since he's clearly mentioned with only half of them and I would think that's kinda important to his description.

Does he have white stripes on his front legs? Otherwise, could you define the shading on the front leg farthest from us? This is beautiful.. I swear how the hell do you always make them look so perfect. o3o 09:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. They should be slashes, not stripes. I made them wrap around, kinda like how a ribbon would work, since there's not much to work with in terms of leg space. My OC is a silver tabby, so I have a lot of time to make gray/silver tabbies and it's some of my favorite things to make, besides black-and-white cats

define the shading a bit? this is gorgeous <span style="">11:37 Wed Apr 8

Re-uploaded. Thank youuu.

Star Flower (L) ~ For Approval
Why the hell did she hang out with Clear Pain in the first place 08:37, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes just a tiny bit by a pixel or two where they're thicker. There are a couple that look to be maybe six or so pixels long, when they look slightly shorter in width on the rogue. Also, unsmudge the tail stripes a bit as well- they're not as smudged on her rogue image. That's what I'm basing all my comments off of since it's a clear side-view. And she hung out because they're both trash imho.

Re-uploaded *prays to Erins that her kits won't be trash too* 08:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why do people hate them so much? >.> I love them both ;_; especially Clear Sky. Anyways, beautiful^^ I think her rogue image's stripes are less broken, and are less smudged/lighter texture. 09:42, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine, I have the rogue file that Beebs sent to me and I matched it 09:44, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

What's the point of asking for comments if users are going to reject them as often as they do? Yes, I'm going there, because this is totally unnecessary. Bramblesnow is correct, honestly. I'm looking right at her rogue image and they are smudged slightly less than this.

Re-uploaded Sorry about that ;.; is this better? 10:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I have a slight concern. If it's a side view, and Star Flower has a stripe along her back, wouldn't it show less than that big stripe you have? Maybe thin it out a little bit, as well as the base of the tail towards her back leg. StormSongz (talk) 15:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Am I the only that's happy for Clear Sky, that he has a new mate? Looks great. See if you Should consider blurring it....?User:Dewdrops56/Dewdrops56 8:21, April, 8, 2015

Cricket (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ew ._. But hey I got my uploader working again. K so I would rather not darken the shading too much more as it starts to looks really yucky with the base colors. Comment away~ 13:04, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. It shouldn't look too bad, imho. Is it tinted, or did you use black? Either choice is good, and I know black on ginger or orange cats looks pretty wicked.