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Harepounce (star) ~ For Approval
Harepounce for President  04:54, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Remove or thin out the facial shading <== there 11:15, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 15:07, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the tail shading just a bit. 20:31 Mon Nov 9

Shading is leaking on the ear. 15:01, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think you forget to fill in the nose. If you did fill it in just disregard this comment. 18:04 Tue Nov 10

It is filled. Anyway, she looks slightly cross-eyed.

I dont see how she does... She is supposed to look bottom right. 00:11, November 11, 2015 (UTC) re-up 15:47, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Also, maybe fix the light source and shading on the tail too, it doesn't look like it matches with the rest of the image. 15:37, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

This is the same exact light source as Houndstar's starclan image, so the shading is fine. It does match with the rest of the image. 19:31, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

at least thin out the bottom side of the tail shading because it covers up the whole tail and confuses others

still working?

Cow(R) - For Approval
Alright, so unless it says in the books she was named after the apperance of a cow, I'm giving her the apperance of my cat since the last time I did that, the cat's description was magically changed by an author later on, so let's try this pattern again. The eyes are also a warmer green color but if they look too yellow I can tweak them a bit. But yeah, as always, if something's outta place then just tell me! I had fun with this  01:33, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her side just a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 04:42, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge (i assume thats what you did, judging by how it looks) the shading a lot more. I can /see/ the smudge marks... 10:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't smudge on Sai. She has fur texture  04:53, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Either way, I can see strange markings on the main body where I think the shading is meant to be. 13:42, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Yes, I plan on working on her tonight, offline has been kicking my ass  04:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  05:34, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but the white can stand to be smoothed out a little more. It looks sharp on the chest and the shading still looks a tad blotchy. 22:07, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

How/where is it exactly blotchy? 05:36, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

I guess just smooth it out in general

I think the image could be darkened a tad. 21:56, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (ES) - Withdrawn
Jackdaw's Cry my bab

First ever textured cat yo 04:10, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him more. --Dewsplash (talk) 04:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

there's a strange dorsal-stripe like stripe

Re-ups I accidentally forgot his nicked ear so i added that. Yes i see the weird pixel on it i'll fix that. Also, i didn't add stripes on him...? 05:14, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Again, i cleaned everything up so it should look better now 05:14, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Crop the image

Reups 05:35, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Make the texture flow more with the fur. 12:32, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

the light on -> that leg shouldnt be as it is, it contradicts the light source. and the shading needs to be blurred or something, 17:49, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

I don't have light on the > leg.... 22:36, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and smooth out the texture, and I'm not sure if you got what Bramble shade, but the texture does need to flow more. I'm not repeating comments, I just didn't know if you got what she said. 03:06, November 14, 2015 (UTC)\

Reups  i just redid the texture completely, i wasn't very happy with it either. 03:57, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

It still needs to flow with the fur more. And please upload your images under Jackdaw's Cry.es.png. I renamed this for you, but in the future please remember to upload it under the same file name you originally uploaded it as. I believe you got this warning with Daisytoe as well. 09:35, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't really know WHAT to name it because of the apostrophe, so I just went for what I assumed it to be. Also, I believe I am consistently naming them now... 19:01, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

it kinda looks like he's got a lazy eye 19:42, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

What are those whitish streaks? O.o If they're highlights, maybe try lowering opacity 20:06, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'm SO sorry, I just can't complete him. Give Jackdaw to someone else, please u.u 05:27, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

are you withdrawing or...

Yes, I am withdrawing 03:49, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Mistpelt (Star) - For Approval
tired lil elder cat 03:50 Fri Nov 13

sharpen and expand the shading

I don't think she should sharpen it but she could definitely blur it and expand it a lot. 07:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's like a dot in the far lower left corner? 13:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 02:35 Sat Nov 14

expand the shading everywhere, especially on the tail. Define the light on the legs.

reuploaded. redid shading again. idk if this is good or not 22:41 Tue Nov 17

Comments before approval? 01:01, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading depth could be defined a lot. It's looking a bit flat on the tail and forelegs.

There's a weird streak of pale texture on the tail.. mind fixing that? 21:47, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Riverstar (ES) - For Approval
I...I hate this. I think I'm just gonna redo the shading 800 times. 02:38, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

There's a white pixel near the tip of his tail. Lovely work! 03:09, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, this is good! The shading's leaking on the back leg furthest away from us. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:31, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little at the top of foreleg farthest from us, near the chest. 13:01, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: What even is this. And thank you guys for the lovely comments. Should I blur the haunch shading more and lighten the chest?

I can still see a white pixel at the top of the tail, and I think the shading is leaking by the chest in between the two front legs, and on the back leg farthest from us, possibly switch the shading so its on ==> that side of the leg, while the light is on <== that side? I can also see you missed a tiny bit of waste in between the two front legs 15:59, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

could you smudge the earpink a little more? boo-e-ti-ful 20:07 Sat Nov 14

Re-uploaded: Changed the shading to look more like Gray Wing's. 22:56, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the lack of comments. CBA?

im gonna break it to say the shading on his front left leg still contradicts the source, and i think youre using an older version of the blank because his leg looks oddly thin. that leg needs the shading defined on it too. 11:33, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I'm not using an older version of the blank. 22:07, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, you are.

Okay. Do you guys want me to redo it on the new blank or should I just copy what I've done onto it? 18:43, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

just layer the new blank over it and remove and fill in what you need. 17:47, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 00:03, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

lighten the shading on the haunch

Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Dust Muzzle (ES) - For Approval
I totally forgot I had this file saved under the wrong name and just uploaded it as was without changing the name. :P Sorry to ask, but could someone fix that for me? Anyway, I'm really happy with this, trying to match the kit was definitely interesting. ^^ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:24, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

define the chest shading

Reuploaded. Also put more pale fur on the hip, it seemed to cut off awkwardly before. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:41, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hind legs. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:40, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (ES) ~ CBA
Not a fan of that shading - I'll definitely smooth it on out on the next upload 13:58, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the hind legs a little? Lovely! 23:02 Sun Nov 15

still working?

Reups yep 16:08, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Robinwing (TC) (Star) - For Approval
01:55, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the main body. Looking nice. I'll promote you into an apprentice

Smoothen shading everywhere :)

Re-uploaded Much better. 01:55, Nov. 17, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a tad more and define the earpink in the shaded ear. This is very nice! 21:49, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you! 02:08, Nov. 18, 2015 (UTC)

define the upper part of the tail shading, please. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:19, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

And could you blur the shading just a little more? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:17, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:32, Nov. 21, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Song (Q)- For Evaluation


My first character art. Give as much critique as possible. Jaysnow (talk) 02:16, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

smudge or blur the patches more, expand and blur the shading quite a bit.

Will do. Thanks. Jaysnow (talk) 02:25, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and blur the earpink, as well as add some shading to them 02:30, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'm going to change her to short haired, because that's how Kate imagines her... Jaysnow (talk) 08:07, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to her face, it looks slightly flat. Also, define shading on her legs

Lighten the shading a bit, too. 22:26, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

The white patches don't seem to flow with the body. Try curving them according to the shape of the cat. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:18, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and add more facial, as well as smooth out the spots. It's good for your first charart! 05:33, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Mud Paws (ES) ~ For Approval
I spent way too much time on this and I still hate it.

Re-upload: Somehow forgot to add earpink, haha

How did you even do this... *.* define the facial shading a bit, please

Re-upload: Did that do it? aLSO THANK YOUU :3 12:19, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the shoulder a little more. Looks really nice! 22:06, Nov. 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I messed around a little with the lil guy. I know the shoulder still looks wonky, I'll get to that in a bit. :3 05:37, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading some more on the body, hind leg, and tail? Awesome job! 12:42, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: brb crying because this shading is absolutely horrendous 02:19, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading to the whole belly and thin out the facial shading just a little bit, please. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:17, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload:  07:54, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading some more on the chest? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:15, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

and could you also smoothen out the shading some more on the shoulders? 21:33 Thu Nov 19

Thorn (ES) ~ For Approval
Kinda happy with this 20:14, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

You should be, this is amazing :D Smoothen shading on her tail and the two legs farthest from us and define it on her face. 20:22, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks c: 20:44, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

There seems to be a round spot of waste above the tail. (had to scroll around to make sure it wasn't my computer screen lol)

Re-ups 15:50, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps add some light to ==> this ear? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:17, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:10, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Gorsefoot (Star) - For Approval
21:52, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the head shading a tad. 00:13 Tue Nov 17

Re-uploaded The shading there doesn't want to cooperate. 02:42, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

I can't /see/ any head shading at the moment. Perhaps darken it? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:16, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:30, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Gooseberry (Q) - For Approval
the base itself is actually really pale... if I lighten the image too much more, I don't think I'm going to be able to see it, so please keep that in mind. Base =/= stripes, and I think you can have darker stripes on a paler base.

Define the head shading a tad? Lovely. ~Russettail13

Re-uploaded.

define the shading on the legs 02:43, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading everywhere. My macbook shows everything darker and I still can't see it on the screen. 11:16, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I am not used to this color in the least.

If you could, perhaps define the facial shading a little bit? I cannot see any shading on my screen. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:15, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is a very difficult color to shade.

Define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us? And if possible, could you define the facial shading some more? Perhaps adding some depth might work? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:14, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. If someone could give me some shading color advice, that would be appreciated. I'm currently using an orange-brown, but are there other colors that would work better? (just not green ;;; )

Maybe just black? :P Can you smudge the earpink a little? Sorry if this seems nitpicky. 18:44, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

use dark red. it's really good for golden cats.

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Shading might be a tad flat in places, but I like this coloring much better.

Cloudberry (TC) (Star)~For Approval
00:52, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the left paw a little more. Lovely work. c: 00:57, Nov. 17, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded Thank you ^^ 01:04, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe consider using Yellowfang's star nose lineart? This one looks a bit odd, and as far as I can tell, all Cloudberry's other linearts are the same as Yellowfang.

its fine....if anything yellowfangs looks odd. 09:53, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Tis amazing. c: I feel as if the main body shading could use some smoothening out, or is that just the shading style? 11:01, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

...So do I redo the lineart or no..? And that's just the shading style. Any more smudging the way I do it and it would need defined again lol. 16:12, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

theres really nothing wrong with it, so only if you want to. 17:43, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

no, don't redo the lineart, it looks fine. 21:59, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I agree with Autumnbright, the shading could use some smoothing out. Especially on the edges. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:13, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded I smoothed it a tiny bit. Bear in mind, it is the shading style, and this is about as smooth as I will get it with how I smudged the shading. 15:09, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the head and right shoulder shading, please. It looks very hard edged and dark. 21:45, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 04:09, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think you should smooth it out more. It looks blotchy. Not all shading styles work on solid cats. 06:24, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Acorn Fur (MC) ~ For Apparoval
10:40, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

define the neck shading?

Perhaps smooth out the shading on the legs a little bit? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:15, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 18:00, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail? 21:43, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

i cant without making it look flat. 17:55, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Shade Pelt (K) ~ For Approval
I'm not super happy with the shading, I might redo it. 20:16 Wed Nov 18

Define shading everywhere? 09:38, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded redid the shading. 16:30 Thu Nov 19

Oatspeckle (MC) ~ For Approval
tbh I'm really happy with this

Okay but this is amazing oh my god *o* Maybe smooth out shading on her tail and her front leg, the one closest to us 09:22, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

The shoulder honestly looks like an oversized circle and not an actual shoulder. 10:27, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

smooth out the shading on the face, neck, and front of the shoulder 16:37, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Echosnout (Star) ~ For Approval
The MC is hard to match. 23:33, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white parts a lot, and smudge the earpink a little more. 00:17, Nov. 21, 2015 (UTC)

for some reason the eyes look strange to me... Maybe define the gradient of them?

Reupload I tried moving the pupil's away from the lighter part of the eye. 19:48, November 21, 2015 (UTC)