Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Flower (Ro) ~ Silver Nomination
So sorry that I haven't been here.. I missed editing articles, (more than usual, at least) so I have decided to come back from the dead. I edited Flower just a tad, since there really wasn't anything to add. It is really similar to Warriors App paragraph, like as if the person just copied it right off of there. Should I fix it a bit, or should I just leave it as it is? 03:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Which Flower. Flower Sharpclaw's sister, or Flower the loner who was mentioned in Sunrise? 17:09 Tue Dec 27

Argh, though I had the right page... Dumb computer. >.< Flower as in Sharpclaws sister, sorry about that. :3 (I'll change the link)  01:57, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Any quotes? I'm not sure that Warriors App only characters get quotes. 01:44, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

You could probably use the same quote I used for Jessamy. 01:51, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Oblivion. I'll go add it. ^-^  20:37, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It's been added so, CBV? 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 04:16, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Olivenose ~ Silver Nomination
I like her name. :3 Comments? 17:17 Tue Dec 27

Quotes are on the way. 17:31 Tue Dec 27

Could you expand Battles of the Clans any more? 00:58, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded by two words, that's all I could. xD 18:05 Wed Dec 28

Quotes are done. 21:15 Wed Dec 28

CBV? 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 04:16, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Echomist ~ Silver Nomination
Quotes are on the way! Comments? 17:21 Tue Dec 27

Could you possibly make a new section for Into the Wild and add how she wasn't in the allegiances there? 01:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

She might have died before than though. If ya read the last sentence in her CP section, it says she might have died. :D 17:51 Wed Dec 28

Quotes are added. 21:13 Wed Dec 28

I added a quote as well. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 14:52, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Well, CBV? 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 04:16, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Jessamy - Silver Nomination
All right, I hope I can remember how to do this. I added a quote that isn't really a quote, but her history looks good to me. 02:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice so far. The first paragraph in her history section seems to describe Sharpclaw more than her. 17:16, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed, hopefully. 01:15, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still describes Sharpclaw more. I suggest perhaps just deleting the whole paragraph, unless you can find a way to emerge it into the other sections. 01:51, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Deleted. 01:53, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 19:30, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Cinders - Silver Nomination
I liked her for some reason. I made her bronze status. Comments? 03:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I rewrote 98% of her history. Will work on the quotes tomorrow. 04:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, minor expanding, added references for all her family, and worked on the quotes. I'll shut up now. x3 19:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Furzepelt - Silver Nomination
I added quotes, which was pretty much all she needed. 01:55, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly detail The Sign of the Moon just a bit more? 20:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:01, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Expand TFW? 17:25 Mon Jan 16

Mouthclaw - Silver Nomination
I expanded the history by 2 paragraphs, added references and a see also. Comments? 02:04, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Can you make the second paragraph flow a bit more? And can you explain what the Clan cats do after they learn what Mouthclaw did? (if that makes any sense xD)  03:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Like this? I added a whole new paragraph to the trouble that Sunpelt gets in, if that's what you mean. 23:41, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

I just realised I need to add quotes. They will be coming in a moment. 23:49, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

No, I think you should delete that paragraph, in my opinion. I just realized that I asked you to write more about Sunpelt that Mouthclaw, my bad... >.<  19:12, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thats okay xD I expanded the last paragraph more and added quotes. I'm not sure about the quotes though, as she's only mentioned in, 2 pages -_- 01:32, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

The history is pretty well-written, but it switches between the past tense ("She had killed many cats from all the Clans and was feared by every cat.") and the present tense ("Sunpelt, a warrior of LionClan, thinks he can defeat Mouthclaw and prove what a brave warrior he is, so he plans to kill her.") several times. Would you mind changing that, please? 18:38, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed everything into present tense, but I don't know what to do with that was. I can't think of a better word for it, because if I changed it, it wouldn't make sence. 01:14, Thu, Jan, 5, 2012

5 days without a comment, is that a good thing? <span style="">01:31, Tue, Jan, 10, 2012

Yeah, it's a good thing. Expand the article if you can anymore. <span style="">01:29 Tue Jan 17

Onestar-Silver Nomination
I would like to nominate Onestar, any coments?

Add a section for The Forgotten Warrior. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  02:29 Fri Dec 30

where would i add it

Under the section for Sign of the Moon. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  02:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Firestar's Quest? I haven't read that book in a while, so I don't know if there's anything *to* expand. :P 02:58, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

ok, any more comments there is nothing to add on firestars quest.

Expand Dawn. <span style="">18:41 Fri Dec 30

The style in Fire and Ice could use some work, Forest of Secrets might be possible to expand, The Darkest Hour needs to focus more on Onestar, Eclipse needs expanding, and The Forgotten Warrior does too. 21:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

i havent read the forgotten warrior what do i do

Use the browse inside of it. <span style="">23:18, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Expand The Fourth Apprentice. 02:21, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Get that expanding done Icewhisker? If you need any help, I'll help you! <span style="">00:21 Thu Jan 12

You still working on this Icewhisker? <span style="">01:33 Tue Jan 17

Rabbitstar ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote. I think that the overall history looks good. Comments? 01:16, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand his history anymore, or add anymore quotes? <span style="">04:14 Sun Jan 1

Can you detail/make the last sentence of his history flow more? 21:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Of course I can; All set! 21:53, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you expand/rewrite the last paragraph? 18:30, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

All set. 20:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments? 20:44, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? <span style="">00:27 Thu Jan 12

All set! His page now contains anything he's ever said. :P 21:48, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Heatherstar - Silver Nomination
I think she's ready for a silver nomination. Comments? 03:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

The page seems pretty good, but maybe the history should be expanded a bit? I have not read any of those books for a while, so you may have everything, but filling in any history gaps would make the article more informative, thus qualifying it for sliver. ;D Just Dance   Gonna be okay...

Can you rephrase the first paragraph in Bluestar's Prophecy? 19:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? <span style="">18:38 Tue Jan 3

I don't think we need to add that her deputy, Reedfeather was almost drowned in the Battle of the Clans paragraph, in my opinion. 22:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I meant the third paragraph in BP, sorry. *headdesk* The first paragraph is fine. 15:36, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Done. (^.^) 16:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Expand Pattles of the Clans? <span style="">00:31 Thu Jan 12

Fail. I meant Battles. xD <span style="">00:33 Thu Jan 12

I looked in Battles of the Clans and found nothing else. u.u 06:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbittail - Silver Nomination
I added some quotes. I think they describe him pretty well. Comments? 04:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Should you describe that in WindClan, they had picked out warriors to travel down in the tunnels in the beginning? 04:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I will, but, where would I add that? 04:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I added it into the quotes section. If it should be moved just tell me. 06:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Rephrase the third paragraph please. 17:25, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Done. ^.^ 06:01, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) - Silver Nomination
I've always loved her too! Comments? <span style="">18:33 Tue Jan 3

Can you detail Night Whispers a tad bit more? 21:07, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you work on The Sight? Just some rewording, and explain why Ivytail got first pick off the fresh-kill pile during the Daylight Gathering. 21:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand Outcast and Dark River? 21:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Done with The Sight and Night Whispers. I'll get on with Dark River and Outcast. <span style="">21:37 Thu Jan 5

Epico. 22:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, and all done. <span style="">18:15 Fri Jan 6

Any quotes? Very well done Sweet! <span style="">00:51, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Imma derp xD I'll get quotes in now. <span style="">17:09 Sat Jan 7

Besides quotes, could you please detail Long Shadows any more, if possible? 17:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can't, sorry. :/ I'm working on getting quotes. <span style="">21:46 Mon Jan 9

Quotes are in. <span style="">01:31 Wed Jan 11

Maybe detail overall history. 01:19, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Done, it's hard to detail a minor charachter... <span style="">21:52 Thu Jan 12

Percy - Silver Nomination
Needs work, yes. Comments? 21:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. The history needs expanding majorly, and the quotes need to show more of his personality. 21:49, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Changed the main quote, rewrote the history, and worked on the quotes. 22:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

All in all, though it may be a short article, it is very well-written. Possibly expand the history slightly? Just Dance  Gonna be okay...

Thank you, Soleil. ^_^ Did some minor expanding, but I'll probably do more later on. 18:29, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nettleclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I added the only quote relating to him, and expanded his history as much as possible. Comments? 00:16, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the quote the main quote. <span style="">00:44, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Maybe detail his history a bit more. Looks good.^^ -- 19:01, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he's only seen in 1 sentence, so thats as good as I can do. And, the quote is better as a dialogue quote...so it can't be the main quote. 00:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw ~ Withdrawn
I made a Beyond the Code section for her, and overall it looks good to me. Quotes will be added soon. 02:20, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Well done. My only suggestion would be to find a main quote that describes her a little more. 15:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I added a link for the nomnom... <span style="">00:40 Thu Jan 12

Yeah, find the quotes, and also, can you expand her history a bit more? -- 01:18, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Adding more quotes, and I expanded The Rescue since SkyClan's Destiny seems to be fine, and in Beyond the Code, she was only mentioned/seen a couple times. 18:27, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I'm going to have to withdraw her.. I am going to work on her article a bit more, then nominate her. 13:57, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart - Silver Nomination
I added 2 quotes as well as adding a description and rewrote the second paragraph of BP. Comments? 22:24, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If you can, break up the paragraphs of the history in CP, expecially the first one. Other then that, this looks great! <span style="">05:12, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Done. 00:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a while since I've read BP, and I'm curious. Does Shellheart appear anywhere else aside from the little battle at Sunningrocks? If so, please elaborate. If not, this is an article that's very detailed, despite him only being in two books. 06:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I searched his name in BP on my kindle and found nothing, but, I'll look again. 00:44, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I searched the browse inside if anyone still cares, and he's only in the allegiances and pages 297, 298, 300, and 302 o3o 03:43, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Flower (Lo) - Silver Nomination
Expanded as much as possible, I added the only quote about her, so comments? 01:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you mention how Flower came to join Sol earlier in the history? Otherwise this looks really nice. 02:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Done -ish, it 'twas always the first sentence. x3 01:24, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Pepper - Silver Nomination
Comments on issues other than quotes? =3 05:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Quotes are added. =3 02:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you find just one more quote, other than that, well done! 01:16, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the only quote that might've worked is stating that he's dead and honestly, I'd rather have two substantial quotes then have three quotes with one extremely poor one. x3. Anyways, thanks! 01:22, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Expand or detail his article in any way, shape or form? xD <span style="">21:53 Mon Jan 16

Nope, only what? Like 8 words about him? x3 01:40, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smoky - Silver Nomination
I'm determined. I rewrote a lot of the history (haven't worked that much on TFW, but there isn't much to do there), but I still have more to do with it. I just needed something more to work with. Yes, I'm about to deal with the quotes. Oh, and I don't want to hear anything about Sign of the Moon and why it doesn't have a section, because he wasn't listed in the allegiances for whatever reason. xP All right, then, comments? 19:58, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Seriosuly, he's perfect in my opinion! <span style="">23:33 Sat Jan 14

Morningmist ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? I've expanded as much as possible. 23:50, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes? <span style="">00:23 Sat Jan 14

Willowstar ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? I added a quote and expanded. 00:50, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Anymore quotes? <span style="">00:26 Sat Jan 14

Patchfoot - Silver Nomination
I looked it over and it looks pretty good. It only needs an opening quote. I am looking through Firestar's Quest and I'm debating over, like four quotes to use. However if you figure one out, you are welcome to do so. 23:09, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I gave him bronze status. Just lettin' you know. Add some quotes if you can, and expand ''Firestar's Quest. <span style="">23:14 Sat Jan 14 ''

Is it possible at all to detail Beyond the Code? 23:19, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll look over. I haven't read Beyond the Code yet so I'd like some help with that. -- 23:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I can help, if you want. 23:55, January 15, 2012 (UTC)