Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define/darken the shading a little. -- 04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of like the stripes on the white, even if it isn't conventional. There's some blurred lineart on the ear. Define and brighten the earpink.  ❀ wild  heart ❀ 04:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Man HOW do you do that? awesome! But darken the shading. 04:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks :). Comments? Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  17:46, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wow this is awesome work I love it! Yes, I can't see ear pink, can you define it? Leaf-storm,17:49,September 25,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Thanks Leaf ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  18:07, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, I looked on the charart cearfully and I think there can be some more ear pink colour on the white tip of ear. Only a little. It's looking like she have ear only on orange part. Leaf-storm,17:31,September 26,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular too. 23:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Shadow (L) - Tweaked
er Comments? 06:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the OA, and what needed to be tweaked? 06:36, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well aren't I smart? :P Shading needs major blurring. Original artist- MosspathOfSkyClan. 06:38, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlight a bit & blur it -- 06:40, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten up said shading a bit? Pretty please? 06:41, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes a tad and blur the haunch highlight. Looks good :3 06:42 Sep 25 Sun

Cutee! Lighten the entire image. 14:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. xD 16:19, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

There are some miscolored pixils inside of her left ear, it'd be our right. 16:31, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:38, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose color. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I thought the nose was supposed to be a darker version of the pelt color. There'a a bit of gray area around her back, so, you may want to get rid of that. =P 22:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I thought so too. Anyways, I think I got the gray. :P 03:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the nose a bit darker? It still seems the same color as the pelt. 00:47, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, you mean lighter? Also, tone down the chest highlight a little bit. 14:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to be a darker color then the pelt. 17:13, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

River (Leader) (L) - Redone
Otterheart was finally approved! XD Anyways, originally by Insane, and the shading was pretty blotchy and needed to be blurred. I wasn't quite sure what shade silver-gray would be, so I just chose a lightish grey and made it look kinda sleek and shiny like silver. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:19, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I really like it! Can you make the nose a tad darker? 15:00, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Blur the underbelly shading a bit. 16:35, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading all around and darken it on the underbelly. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:30, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Wow, I didn't realize how long I procrastinated uploading this. XD I don't think the changes are showing, I may be wrong though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the tail shading more? 21:52, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:05, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (W)~ Redone
OA was Mintstarr, and this was hardest style to redo. Comments? 19:03, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink & theres this one tiny stripe near the tip of the tail that's too dark & needs blurring -- 19:49, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

The right hindpaw is darker than the others. If it's part of the style lighten it up so that it doesn't look too dark. Much better than mine :P. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:20, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! Maybe darken/redden the earpink a tad? I can barely see it. And in this image her tail-tip is black. It should be made black on her other images. If I were a Warrior, I'd tweak Silverstream's other pics, but I'm an Apprentice *facepalm* I hope I'm nominated in less than 300 centuries :P- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 09:22, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

If you prove yourself, that is :P. Define the earpink. 22:16, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfall (D) - Redone
I realize I was only supposed to tweak it, but no matter how much I blurred it, it was still blotchy. But if it's that much of a problem, I'll retry. Otherwise, comments? ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:30, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Bramble, shading needed to be blurred and highlights were too concentrated. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:32, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks better anyways. Can you lighten the shading ever so slightly though? It looks kinda odd. 21:37, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the earpink looks a bit purple, so make it redder. 22:31, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

A pink cat? Wow xD Blur the tail shading. 23:22, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's rose-cream, Snow. An odd color, indeed. 05:13, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still seems purple. Redden it more. Great work on the shading, though. :) 00:48, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks, it was very hard! :) ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:36, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, it looks very lumpy. 17:05, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:18, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (W) ~ Tweaked


Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?

Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now lighten it and add more shading all around. 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch -- 01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Skywatcher (E) - Tweaked
Okay, original artist was Bramble. He needed scars, but in his description he was also described as having a white-flecked muzzle and a matted pelt, so those elements were added as well. I blended the shading a tad in a few places as it did not touch the lineart. I am hoping to tweak his loner art as well so it will have continuity, but if someone else does it then I'm not going to throw a fit. Anyways, comments for improvement? 18:06, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the arm shading, please. 20:13, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone as long haired. OA is Bramble. I'm not changing the color of the ear pink, because it's the same as the elder charart, nor am I changing the base pelt color, as that's the same as well. 18:26, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Have a little less shading on the tail. 20:51, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:58, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading/non-shaded part, and lighten the paws a bit. 22:37, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:43, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Birdflight (W) - Redone
I love this, though I loved her old stripes, too. Original artist was Goldenpaw, and the stripes were drawn on unrealistically. 20:00, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The tail stripes need to match, it looks like it was taken from a completly different cat 20:03, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:11, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

<3 20:12, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the tail shading towards the top a bit, because it looks a little flat if anyone knows what I mean. 20:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's a little dark now... 20:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like the way you did the tail. If you think it's too dark, you can lighten it, but it's your choice. 20:49, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened it anyways. 21:06, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple, and more pink/red. 22:35, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It looked fine to me. 23:37, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pouncetail (E) - Redone
OA was Flamingomom3, and it needed to be longhaired and needed stripes. Comments? 22:34, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, I like this ^o^ Redden the earpink a smidge and blur the shading along the tail. 22:42, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:15, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the stripes. 23:19, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:21, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ooooooh pretty. *.* The earpink seems the be kind of a funny shape though, could you make it the shape it's supposed to be for elders? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I copied the earpink shape from Poppydawn, so I don't think it looks strange...

Nevermind; I didn't really like the shading so I redid it. 23:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (A) - Redone
Comments? It needed to be longhaired. 23:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Icethroat21. 23:45, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Darken the shading a bit and brighten the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:50, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hollowpaw (A) ~ Redone
Redone as longhair, and since it was decided to give him a pale underbelly rather then a white one. OA was Flamingomom3, I believe. Comments? 00:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the stripes and smudge the haunch stripes, and define the ear pink. Y U NO EMAL 2 TO ME??? >:| 00:23, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; it blends in with the pelt too much. Darken the shading, and blur and smudge the part where the pale chest meets the fur. 00:24, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Rising Moon - Tweaked
Shading tweak. Thickened, darkened, and added depth to shading. OA was MosspathofSkyClan. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:31, September 30, 2011 (UTC)