Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Snaketooth (W) - Redone
Yay, new tabby style. Original artist was Mousetalon, and I redid him to be longhaired. 17:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Darken the stripes ever so slightly and make the earpink more triangular. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:29, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

They eyes are too neon. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 17:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the tail tip, ear-tip, and bottom chest fur. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 19:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did I get them all? 00:59, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

it says he broke his foot, and may not be able to hunt and fight again, maybe twist one of his feet? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not so sure though... 20:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular. 22:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't add a broken leg yet. And the earpink is triangular enough I guess... 23:41, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it blends in to the pelt too much. 22:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Larkwing (MC) ~ Redone
Original artist was Dawnfeather; redone as a shorthair. Comments? 22:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Do you think you could add a stripes in the area that's above her belly and in between her front arm and hanch? Also, there's a few miscolored pixils below her whiskers that are colored green. 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 22:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Ivystripe, but I couldn't add another stripe without ruining the shading, so I just made the other stripe longer. 23:06, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be more silver. Just seems like dark gray tabby right now. 23:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add a couple more stripes as well. 00:24, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Add shading to the herbs. 01:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes towards the base. It looks odd being blurred at the tips, but not quite as blurry at the base of the lineart. 20:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. Looks good Mistystar! :D 11:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe...sorry, but this already went through 36 hours without comments. Re-Uploaded, can this be archived? 21:51, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know, I'm very, very impatient. But, can someone archive this? ;D 23:07, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's not ready. I don't like how the stripes fade out and add a lot more stripes. 23:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I added stripes before, but cats don't necessarily have that many stripes. Besides, other chararts that didn't look ready were approved before just for going through 24 hours, so I don't see why this one shouldn't. Not everyone has the same artistic views...I'll try to add more stripes, but I like it with the stripes fading out. 23:14, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower (Q)~ Redone
I'm acctually going to stick with a character! Anyway, OA was Sandstar and it needed to match the warrior. 01:49, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! I envy your toirtoiseshell making skills. *.* Blur the white on the haunch just a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:15, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink ever so slightly and blur it. I wish I could make torties like you. =/ 23:06, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuplaoded- Im not sure the changes are showing, it might just take a moment. The only reason im any good at torties is cause my first one was Sol rogue. It was hard. 23:10, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, just dull the earpink a tiny bit more. It's a little bit bright. =)  Shadewing ''' Blades of the Night  02:06, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Patchpelt (E) ~ Tweaked
Shading tweak. Original artist is Icethroat. Also, I've blurred as much as GIMP'll let me. 02:24, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the patches in the fuzzy style? Blur the shading at the base of the tail and make the ear-pink less purplish. 03:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks like that because of the shading. You know what, is anyone going to get offended if I re-do it? I promise I'll do all of the others as well. I kinda want to smudge the patches. 03:27, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and smudge the patches =) 03:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, awesome! Thanks! 03:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I say go ahead and redo it. XD It'll probably look better. I think most things look better redone, because it can be really hard to JUST tweak things without making them look worse sometimes. But yeah, I say redo it. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it now. I'll then re-do the others as well. 04:05, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Here's the horrid re-do. If this doesn't work out, I'll just go back to tweaking the other. Reuploaded. 04:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the black a teeny tiny bit, and something looks odd about the direction the furs smudged in. Maybe make it follow more of the direction fur would go on a real cat? If that makes any sense. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:32, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nah. I'll just work with the other one. There was really nothing wrong with the patches on this one anyways. I did fix the ear pink, however. 05:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading needs blurring. 21:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. A) - Redone
I'm actually pretty fond of this one! :) OA was me, redone as a longhair and reworked the scars on the face. Comments? 03:24, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oooooooooohhhhhh, it's pretty! Thicken the tear on the ear, please. 03:25, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Cloudy! 03:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Olivenose (W) - Redone
I've decided I seriously need some more practice on Tortoiseshells so I decided to do Olivenose's image. XD Anyways, OA was Mousetalon, and the shading needed to be tweaked, and the patches needed to be redone to look more natural. PLEASE don't comment telling me to make the white lighter, it's only dark cause of the shading, it's actually pure white underneath it all and if I lighten the shading it will look flat. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:07, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

O.O .....make the ear pink a tad bigger.... HOLY CRAP DID YOU MAKE THIS?! 04:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. And yes I made this. I know. It's horrible. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:36, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just the opposite. I think Iceheart should watch her back. You're really good with this stuff. Blur the tip of the ear pink a bit more. 04:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Pssssssh, you can't even COMPARE me with Iceheart. She's way too epic for me to be compared to her. And yes, this IS horrible. I can't really do Tortoiseshells.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh PLEASE Paleh. You're torties are EPIC! Even your ugliest tortie would be pretty! 10:32, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I call sdoing the apprentice image. It probably won't be as good next to yours, Pale. xD This is PRETTY! I literally see nothing wrong with this. 11:50, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

This looks'' beautiful. ''How the heck did you MAKE this?? Silverflower  ...the flower of the heart 13:17, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Awwwww *blushes* Though I still think this is horrible, thanks guys. XD And alrighty Icestorm! ^^ I originally considered doing her apprentice image too, but then I made it, and it turned out worse than this. XD Like WAY worse. So I got rid of it. :P So it's fine by me. XD Wow, three comments and nothing wrong with it. o.o ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is gawjus! On her apprentice image she had a white tail tip, so add that :) 21:15, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, too. :D 21:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - This image doesn't have to match her apprentice image at all. The apprentice image is being redone too, and since I redid this completely, it doesn't really have to match anything. But I reddened the earpink. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:05, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the paws? they look really dark. Its probably the shading, but its hard to tell that its white. 22:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrykit ~ Tweaked


I actually had fun making this! Anyways, she needed stripes cuz she's ginger. OA is Mistyheart. Comments? 10:58, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stiripes a lot. I had a hard time seeing this - but I like the style you made. Pretty. 11:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also define the shading. It looks cute, Rainwillow ;3 20:21, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great job, Rainey! Darken the stripes, add stripes to the head. 21:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lionblaze (W) - Tweaked
- I just darkened the shading and re-did the stripes so it could match his apprentice image. Comments? 20:16, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, Lovely! Thicken the stripes on the tail a tad and redden the earpink. Looks great :D 20:19, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I didn't thicken the stripes because they're thin on the apprentice image. 21:47, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the original artist? xD Technically, the apprentice image should have been changed to match this, since this was redone first, but whatever. Darken the tail shading. 21:53, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look odd, brown against golden. And the leg stripes get lost in the shading. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Mintstar, they're a darker golden. Not brown. I darkened the leg stripes and the shading. 22:02, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, OA was you, Misty =) 22:04, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) - Redone
Redone as shorthair. I'm pretty proud how this came out ^.^ OA was Insaneular. Comments? 21:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Splashpelt! Define the earpink. 21:13, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is good. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:45, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, lighten the earpink, darken the shadingo n the tail, blur the lighter part of the chest. 21:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) - Redone
I think it's too smudged. It needed petal shaped patches, and I redid the coloring so it didn't look multi-colored instead of tortoiseshell. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, the orignal artist was Icestorm. You don't mind if I continue to work on this Icestorm do you? ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well....I didn't see the problem before.... 21:52, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

If you mean the original image by "before" it was on the tweak list for petal shaped patches. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

It is. Lighten the shading, and blur the patches. 21:56, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but did it really require to be re-done? 21:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- no, but adding the patches would've meant adding shading and highlights, and they were all around. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add a pixel for her eye color below her white. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sucks to have your images randomly redone doesnt it Icy? Make the yellow more ginger. 23:14, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Tweaked
Original artist was Elorisa. I basically just darkened the stripes and the shading. Comments? 22:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could basically re-do the stripes? They're bothering me. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)