Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 102

Turtle Tail (KP) - Redone
OA is me. All colors are the same as the other images.

Can you smudge the spoletches a little more maybe? (Are they even spoltches or patches, I can't tell the differance between them..) So beautiful :3 03:16, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

They should be smudged about the same as the other images, so can I ask for a second opinion on that?

Its fine, honestly. 05:31, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

as far as i know only warriors can comment on tweaks? Anyway, just define the shading a tad. 12:00 Mon Mar 23

Re-uploaded. No, warriors and up can tweak. Everyone is allowed to comment wherever they see fit.

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Graypool (W) ~ Tweaked
OA is Shadewing, tweaker was Paleclaw. Tweaked for darkness and to match the kit/apprentice. I'll define the shading next upload, because I can hardly see it. 13:22 Sat Mar 21

I think just defining the shading will do and this will be fine 03:43, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 14:06 Sun Mar 22

Lighten the shading just a tad, please.

reups 11:58 Mon Mar 23

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Redtail (Alt. Star) - Redone
- OA was me. Redone for pattern accuracy and updated tail lineart 22:49, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the chest- I'd think there would be some.

Re-uploaded 18:21, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

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Mousefang (ki) ~ redone
same as all of the previous 21:35, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading, don't darken it. Do what I've suggested to you countless times.

re-up 18:40, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

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