Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 31

One-eye (Q) - Approved
Yay! My first submision as a warrior! Okay, I did One-eye's queen picture because I've just always liked her, especialy when she was a warrior in BP. And the eye, I was trying to make it look cloudy but I don't think it came out quite right. Comments?--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:47, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Make it like the warrior version; sort of a milky white. Put a pale pupil in as well. -- Tinsel claw  19:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with bramble.Make it more like a milkey white color,the fur is to much of a gray color, and I also agree to put a pale pupil,the eye sorta looks weird with out it.--Firepelt 19:52, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Reuploaded: Okay, I ran the dodge tool over it a lot, did it help? And how's the pupil? If it looks to precise I could blur it some--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:58, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry,but the pupil does need to be blurred,just a tad bit.the dodge tool did help though!--Firepelt 20:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Alright, I'll blur it. Right now I'm on a different computer and my One-eye image isn't saved on here. So I'll work on it later tonight=)--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:25, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait! Okay, I blurred the pupil, does it look better?--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:40, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...it still looks like an amber color, make it entirely like her warrior version, a pale white-ish color, and maybe a small gray pupil in the middle (where the blurred lineart is right now). Sorry if this doesn't help any. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:18, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better?--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:22, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

blurr the shading.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:42, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the shading as much as I could with pixlr--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:25, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice. Love how you did the eye. ;) I would darken the ear pink just a tad, though. -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 21:40, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink. Better?--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:20, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern, that is the correct eye. Look at her warrior image. The cloudy eye is her right eye in her warrior image. So, I made it the right eye on her queen picture. And she doesn't have an elder image yet, Spottedwing has it up for approval. I left a comment that she had the wrong eye--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:45, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:01, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 17:39, December 11, 2009 (UTC)