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Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120923200241!Shellyheart.png 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me.

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinx the power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.  Charlie  Let's   go to   Candy Mountain  02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

I couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows  call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/5/56/Giratina_orig.gif Crystals   over   Sparks  http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/2/27/Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. -- Đark ɦallows  06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? 20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on these? 00:44, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I am, I've just been having complications with it. My sincerest apologies :(  01:04, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front paws are still a bit too big, can you shrink them a bit? 19:37, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bump the closest eye up higher and smooth out the back. 20:32, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front left (my left) paw should be facing the front a bit more. It's on quite an awkward angle.  Millie  It's   all   black magic!  02:07, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The face looks...How do I put this? Flat-ishPikachushinx the power of the past 14:58, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, the face is fine. With the pose that it is in, the head would be angled that way, making the face appear that it looks kind of 'flattish'. 01:20, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 17:56, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm trying, I really am, the anatomy just frustrates me at times because at this angle, it's difficult to get perfect  02:51, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

The front paw on this<--- side is still at an awkward angle. Could you please fix that? :3 02:57 Thu Oct 25

I'm going to feel horrible for critiquing this, because I'm Horrid at cat anatomy, and I wouldn't be able to do any better. Also, if I repeat anything from up there^ I did Not mean to. I would remove the line on the back, the legs look too thick, the paws I don't think should be wider than the legs themselves, the tail is crooked, as is the back leg closest to us, and to me the neck looks to short. -- 18:08, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the back a little more and move the "foot" on the hind leg back a little. 00:28, October 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week with no update and over a month and a half since the initial upload... Sorry, Ivy, I know you're trying and your blank is cool, but I think someone else should finish this. Keep the pose but get it wrapped up. 16:23, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

I've really been trying, but with the redlines being so different and not entirely getting it, it's just been really difficult. I don't want to give this up, but I guess if the project agrees, I can send my file over to someone new. :/  19:02, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Well I've asked cloudy multiple times what would happen about time limits and such on this, and though an agreements never been made, but I personally think Ivy should have 2 months on this, and if it's not approved by then, someone else could take it, keeping the same pose. It's a blank, it should have a bit more time than normal images. However you would have to keep uploading it Ivy. I certainly wouldn't mind taking over, but I personally think Ivy should get until two months are up before it goes up for grabs to anyone, unless she chooses to withdraw it early for any reason. 05:37, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. Two months is good; twice as long as a normal charart. However, I think Ivy should choose who the blanks get passed off to, since they were hers. I also agree with keeping the same pose, since /that's/ why these blanks were picked.

Alright. Well, I did try and fix them up again, but I really need help on the paws. They are giving me the fits, no matter how much I re-shape them XD  01:32, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Try making them more round, especially the one that is off the ground. 21:33, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Ivy? 04:10, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

I /am, I didn't see the comment. I'm unable to shape the paws right and I am asking for help to get them right, I don't think I worded it correctly but I need a redline over my image on how the paws should look since I can't make them righ. 06:04, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oops. Sorry. I didn't see your comment. Here, I made some redlines. It might be a bit stylized but I hope it helps. 02:33, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

If you give it up, can I take over? Crys tal  hea  rt! ❄  20:48, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

First of all, Ivy's supposed to pick who to give it to when time's up, not just give it to whoever asks. Second, it's quite rude to ask to take over something before it's declined. Please don't do that. 14:31, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

However, it has been two months, as agreed. 03:39, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used Breeze's redline pretty heavily, I hope this does it. If not, I already have someone in mind who can take over. I'm about at my wit's end with this lol  03:48, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

The head seems a little flat. Try rounding it out a little, move the closer ear forward, and make the muzzle stick out a bit more. 17:44, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (Alt W)- Under Evaluation
Tried my best with that shading :P. Comments? Bbun (talk) 01:21, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading. 01:22, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bbun (talk) 01:31, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur it some more and lighten the legs a little. 02:14, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong; but doesn't this need scars? 12:08 Tue Oct 23

Nope it doesn't, as he was mentioned as scarred in Into the Wild and this alt is from Yellowfang's Secret. 12:17, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ignore the waste in the backround, I'll remove them if that's the only thing I need to fix left Bbun (talk) 18:52, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading on the tip of the tail and lighten the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  вαʐïṉģα   19:01, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope the changes are showing :P Bbun (talk) 19:27, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The file needs to be File:Clawface.warrior.alt.png.

You mean to be renamed or to be changed? Also I don't know how to "define" the tail tip so I'll leave it at that until more people complain. I'm focusing mainly on the waste now. Bbun (talk) 19:34, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There's some waste by his closest ear, his tail, and his paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Halloween!  20:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

When you define the tail tip's shading, you make it more visible. But I agree with Feather, it needs to be defined. 21:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

So where do I put the tail tip shading? And I already know about the waste. So that means I blur the tail tip shading along with the rest of the body? Bbun (talk) 21:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Do you have shading on the tail tip? Looking at it looks like there isn't any, so you could add it, Just make sure they are moth blurred equally. /hope this makes sense /horrible at explaining things. 23:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried at doing the tail shading. Ignore the waste- I'll clean it up later. Bbun (talk) 23:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Please change the file name to what I asked you earlier. You can ask 'Teldy to change it for you if need be.

Re-uploaded Teldy already fixed it, and tell me if the wasteless pic is showing. Bbun (talk) 23:46, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Can you connect the tail tip shading with the rest of the tail shading? It looks out of place with a blotch of unshaded fur. Oh, and I believe I see just a bit of waste near his tail tip. 01:17, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed tail shading and waste. Bbun (talk) 01:29, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

I see waste by the tail. 15:59, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if the new changes are showing. Bbun (talk) 18:19, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There is still waste around the entire image. 18:39, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, this is at least the third time I've asked you. Use this file to upload your image. We follow a naming scheme here, and you need to follow it.

Fixed, I think. Bbun (talk) 19:14, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

No, still not fixed. Make sure to put all of the periods in. Also, there is waste all around the image, I believe. 20:27, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know how to make it file. Removed the waste. Bbun (talk) 22:27, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Cloudy told you how to do it... Define the leg shading a bit. 23:03, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail 23:32, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if there's any tail waste still showing. I uploaded this picture on the link Cloudy showed me. If there's anymore mistakes on this and if its uploaded wrong again, I'll upload it on the link she showed me. Bbun (talk) 16:55, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

It's still not right. Next time you save it as a .png on your computer, just make a copy with the correct name (Clawface.warrior.alt.png), and then make sure to change which image is up above. 18:07, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if the changes are showing. Bbun (talk) 18:53, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Yep. Could you blur and darken the shading a bit? 04:52, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bbun (talk) 20:10, October 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There is a part on the tail with a much darker, blotchy part. Blend that out or remove it altogether  15:49, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 20:50, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I finally found the old .xcf again. Bbun (talk) 00:44, November 7, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur/blend the shading/highlights and it looks like the blob on the tail is still there.

And brighten the ear pink just a bit. 20:51, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 00:36, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redone this boy. Bbun (talk) 04:02, November 12, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading a tad. 03:38, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 22:55, November 14, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading a bit, please. 18:53, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Also define it a bit. Especially the tail shading. 21:42, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope I can get this boy CBA'd soon! Bbun (talk) 22:50, November 16, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

It looks like he has a miscoloured pixel near the tip of his tail Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 00:36, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reups I hope this is one of the last changes I need before he gets approved- its nearly a month! Bbun (talk) 00:12, November 19, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the body shading a bit more. 13:07, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Gray cats are pretty big pain to shade, blig the tail shadings only a bit more 13:13, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-ups Bbun (talk) 00:31, November 20, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There are specks of waste around the image, moreso around the lower half of the tail, and a tiny bit on the back. Also, the shading on the legs seems to be a bit blotchy, so smooth it out a bit? I agree with Leafy. Gray cats /are/ a pain, but, this is showing some major promise. Shouldn't be much longer before a CBA.

Re-ups I tried :P. Bbun (talk) 23:08, November 20, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Lighten the shading on the front legs. 23:43, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

The shading's fine. Define the earpink a little more, however. This is pretty darn close to a CBA^^ 01:30, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened that earpink. Can't wait for that CBA!

Add a little variation to the shading on the forelegs, and blur it on the neck. 17:41, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:01, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't define the shading anymore. --Bbun (talk) 22:26, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

What program do you use? All you have to do is duplicate the shading layer and lower the opacity on it. Besides I think it could be defined in a few areas like the haunch and tail. 23:58, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

I use GIMP. Bbun (talk) 00:43, November 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Then that's all you probably have to do. I only used GIMP for a short amount of time but I remember mostly everything about it. 17:25, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchwind (A) - For Approval
Tabby guy! ^.^ ,17:23, November 6,2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes a bit to match the warrior. He's so purdy~ 17:29, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes thicker, too. Very beautiful. =) 17:37, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I also changed his colour slightly to match..but Its still not perfect anyway. ,20:08, November 6,2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match the warrior....like, in terms of style and all... (sorry for not elaborating, I can't think)

Youre evil.. no of course youre not..rawrr ,09:49, November 10,2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Leafy? o3o 03:37, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah! Im just busy. Reuploaded ,16:06, November 13,2012 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink 02:14, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,16:30, November 16,2012 (UTC)

The stripes still don't match the other images. x3 18:50, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

You know what? This: Reuploaded ,13:09, November 19,2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes could match a bit better... o3o. 23:48, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the stripes a little? 23:55, 19, 11, 2012

x.x Okay, I think that we should actually tell Leafy how to fix the stripes, instead of just saying to make it match better, which is really vague. I agree with Mounty on the blurring.. Maybe you can lighten the stripes a little? They look a bit too dark/brownish. 00:05, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, opacity-wise. I guess these are too...stylized, I think. I'm not entirely sure how to describe it. The stripes on the kit and apprentice are...uh... I guess the word "simple" could fit in here without offending anyone, I hope..

Reuploaded: I lightened and blurred stripes a little, but I think I made it worse anyway. ,15:51, November 22,2012 (UTC)

Maybe get rid of a few stripes and sharpen the rest a bit. owo 15:58, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (Alt. A) ~ CBA
So here he is....I know shading needs to be defined, i'll do that in the next upload, so other than that, comments? Pad foot Mischief Managed 03:01, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a bit? And there might be some gray pixels on the front leg (closest to us). 03:36, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Swiftpaw.apprentice.alt.png. 03:46, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading.

Reuploaded (Dear Lord grey cats hate me...) Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 23:06, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shoulder shading. 06:59, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define/expand the lightsource, mostly on her face and tail. owo 15:13, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

And blur/smudge the earpink a tad. 14:16, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

So umm...I'mm withdraw this cause I can't get anything to agree with me, and I lost the .xcf (Remind me to never clean out my computer again) and I'mma be up in Kansas for the rest of the week. Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 02:38, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over~ 02:42, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:52, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a tad moar. 09:46 Wed Nov 21

Re-uploaded. Grey cats suck 12:21, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit? Pretty! =3 20:49, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:15, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 16:06, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (Ki) ~ For Approval
kit with a stupy tail<333 <span style="">10:12 Sat Nov 17

I love this <3 Maybe blur the earpink a tad? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ I hate   pears :3  11:20, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the tip of his tail more rounder? <33  17:47, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i theenk the tail is better now. i didn't blur the earpink, Feather, because it's fine. ( blur tool is so overrated. smudging 5ever. ) <span style="">06:53 Mon Nov 19

I think that the earpink could be blurred a tad, especially on the bottom edges. x3 Way better that I could have done, great job! =)  13:04, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">05:18 Tue Nov 20

Define the stripes just a tad? I like this. Especially since the kit blanks are a butt to work with. ._.

Could you elaborate on what you're meaning by 'define'? Un-blur them ( omai, bad wording ) or darken them? o3o <span style="">09:47 Wed Nov 21

Unblur then just a tad, and darken them a smidge as well. Sorry about that, Berry. =P

Re-uploaded That better? x3 <span style="">16:06 Thu Nov 22

There's some waste around the image and oddly colored pixels on the tail. Yes, that looks better.

Re-uploaded I forgot that blurring stuff can create waste and miscolour stuff. -derp- <span style="">16:10 Thu Nov 22

Is it just me or is his whole tail black? 19:00, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors are from her leader image, as I have the file from when I made the loner. Comments?

Can you make the cream parts a bit more softer? Sorry for the fail at explaining things x.x Like, can you blur them or something to match the other images xD  21:16, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

They're actually smudged, and it's a pain to do this on a smaller blank. ._. I think it's fine, taking the blank's size into account.

Can you possibly make the cream on the chest a little wider? <span style="">23:52, 19, 11, 2012

Re-uploaded.

Darken the shading and define the ear-pink a touch more? 03:45, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The ear pink is fine, I think.

Could just be me, but the pale belly looks slightly too saturated. 22:01, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (W) ~ CBA
Oh geex I fails x.x Comments? <span style="">23:07, 19, 11, 2012

Could you possibly blur the shading on the chest? 23:44, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">23:50, 19, 11, 2012

Gah, I hate to mention this, since this is such a pretty image, but it looks like Crystalheart reserved this before you. 02:05, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

There wasn't a date on that reservation. <span style="">02:22, 20, 11, 2012

Nope. There was no date. Therefore, the image is Mounty's.

Make the shoulder cream a bit less smooth. More bumpy to match the app. 18:58, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">00:58, 21, 11, 2012

Define the shading on the front legs? 17:38, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">04:06, 23, 11, 2012

CBA? 16:54, November 23, 2012 (UTC)