Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Nominations/Approved 17

Brambleberry (Star) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Brambleberry.star.png the shading is flat and hard to see. If Ivy doesn't want this, I'd like this if it passes. 10:48, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * asdfghjkl 10:50, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * I will only change my vote if this is offered to Ivystripe first. He is extremely proud of this image (and the MC), and I can almost guarantee that he'll be upset if his images are tweaked without his knowledge. This means go and leave a message on his talk page and tell him that the image is his should he want it. Other than that, I'm sorry, but I refuse to vote yes.
 * oops, I'm sorry that I didn't know that. I let him know on his talk page 12:54, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * 04:22, May 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * Totally. 14:20, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * 11:36, May 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:31, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Tom (Ro) (Rogue) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Tom (Ro).rogue.png Needs ragged fur. If Breeze doesn't want it, I want this. 08:47, May 11, 2015 (UTC)


 * You can have him, sure. 12:29, May 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:09, May 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:53, May 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:14, May 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * 10:49, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Bluestar.star.alt2.png File:Bluestar.leader.alt.png File:Bluestar.star.alt3.png The images these were based off of didn't have a torn ear, or the shoulder scar, so shouldn't they be removed? Also, I'll take them if the OA's don't want them. And I know the alt StarClan 3 isn't currently being used, but since we've decided to go with these alts, I think it should be added back. 19:20, May 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd like mine  18:39, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:26, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * 10:49, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:13, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:32, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:49, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Logfur - Tweak Nomination
File:Logfur.warrior.png Oh goodness, I think this was one of the first tabbies I actually did. I recently found the file, and I'd really like to redo the shading (there's no source- don't tell me there is; my old images from early 2012 did not have one) and slightly tweak the stripes so they don't fade in with the shading. I wouldn't be changing much of anything else, since I wouldn't want to redo it otherwise.
 * 08:19, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * 08:20, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * It looks gray too 08:21, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * The shading can be defined too. 08:29, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * Fox: it looks gray because I usually shade my dark brown cats with black- I love how it looks, and I'm not changing that any time soon. Stealth: Of course it needs defining, which is why I'm going to redo the shading altogether.
 * 13:59, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * I actually think this is fine. 00:49, May 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:47, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Bramblestar.apprentice.png etc. If he's dark brown he could be darkened, imho. 13:58, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * Its fine, honestly. It doesnt have to be insanely dark, and i can still clearly see that hes dark brown.-- 21:33, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * Briarlight was tweaked and her original images were as dark as these current ones. 00:37, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * If he was described as very dark brown... but his not really. 03:31, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * He's actually described like Tigerstar, and him being dark brown is significant. If we've tweaked Briarlight for this, then Bramblestar is not exempt. This isn't dark brown. Leader image is still mine.
 * can I have the apprentice if this passes? 03:37, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * the images i worked on are mine [as im forgetting at the moment] 09:57, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * That would be the warrior and deputy for you, Beebs.
 * yeah based on what you've said above he could be darkened a bit. May I have the kit if this passes and the OAs (idk who they are) don't mind? 01:50, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * If you pick on shades of brown, I wouldn't say Appledusk is light brown. 13:55, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think he's fine, tbh. 23:44 Thu May 21
 * couldn't hurt 03:46, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Egg - Tweak Nomination
File:Egg.apprentice.png Needs stripes. 02:58, May 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:04, May 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:07, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd like these, please, as I was the last to tweak them.
 * 02:56, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:12, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Tansypaw ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Tansypaw.kit.png and the others. They need stripes. I'd like this set, if no one minds. 00:35, May 24, 2015 (UTC)


 * Nah, StarClanner's mine as I'm the OA. 02:07, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:56, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:33, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 07:51, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 08:13, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Berrynose - Tweak Nomination
File:Berrynose.kit.png and the alts. Needs stripes. I'd like the set (since the OA's are inactive) except for the apprentice and the alt warrior, which those images belong to Jayce. 04:07, May 24, 2015 (UTC)


 * 07:42, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:33, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * I don't want the apprentice, but to try and claim the alt warrior when I still have it on the tweak page would be greedy and really stupid. =/
 * lol whoops. In that case, would any one mind if I snagged the apprentice? I'll drop my claim on both of Daisy's images. 00:17, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * Burnt can I work on the apprentice? I didn't get any chances to tweak the creamies. all taken It's ok if you want it. 07:57, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * I dropped my claim on both of Daisy's images. Would you mind taking those? 07:58, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * I would't mind taking any of them^^ Just to make sure are they the apprentice and the kit versions? 08:00, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * the kittypet and the loner 08:00, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 08:12, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Rosepetal - Tweak Nomination
File:Rosepetal.apprentice.png Needs stripes. 02:58, May 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:05, May 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * I want the apprentice 02:03, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:56, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd like the warrior and the kit if the OAs don't mind. 22:21 Sun May 24
 * 22:33, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:10, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Daisy - Tweak Nomination
File:Daisy.kittypet.png Needs stripes. I want the kittypet and the loner. 02:58, May 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:06, May 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * the cream alt queen is mine 07:14, May 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * May I have the normal queen then? 02:54, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:33, May 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * Silverpool has laid claim to the kittypet and loner 08:36, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * sorry, but as the OA, I want the normal queen. 10:27, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:10, May 25, 2015 (UTC)|Hawky]] until 26th May)

Hootwhisker (A) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Hootwhisker.apprentice.png It's already up for tweaks, but it turns out I lost the file. In the tweaks, it was up for darkening - you'd say that's easy to tweak without the file, but the problem is, when I tried that on the png image the shading became blocky and a right mess. Since it's not got layers, I can't fix that. It's better off as a redo, and I'd like it if it passes. 20:53, May 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:15, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * 06:25, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * What are you talking about 10:48, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * But it's way too dark - I can barely pick out the shading and light, and since I've lost the layers, it'll be an utter nightmare to tweak. 11:59, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * And I can tell you, Burnt, that the image you just linked would probably get tweaked again- sometimes, darkening an image does ruin the shading and texture. I think it's okay to redo this time. If she had the file, then I say use that instead and tweak it, but she doesn't have the file. Sometimes when you save an image here and open it in PS or GIMP, it's not quiiiite the same as it should be on the wiki- images can and have been distorted before.
 * sorry to rush this, but there's someone trying to do the warrior image - it's unfair on them to try and match something that's being redone, so it'll be a waste of progress for them if mine is completely different. 14:43, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:42 Thu May 21
 * 13:18, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Ferncloud ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Ferncloud.star.png I really thought the shading should be lightened, but most of you might have thought it's unnecessary. After more thoughts I've decided to put it here at last 07:48, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * It's really uniform. 07:52, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * Shading darkness is artist's choice, and even then, I don't think it's necessary. Dark shading exists on a lot of our images.
 * I think it's fine. When I made Flowerpaw I made it this dark Storm  &#9835;  14:02, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * You might be right, but Flowerpaw's shading looks lighter than Ferncloud's StarClan image to me. 14:06, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * Regardless of the shading darkness of Flowerpaw's image, I still agree with Snow and Storm, sorry. 17:54, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * I honestly like it that dark 18:55, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:37, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * 05:04, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Emberkit (CJ) (Ki) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Emberkit (CJ).kit.png The stripes are kind of "unprocessed" and light on the legs needs to be defined, The earpink should be smoothed out too. I'd like it if it passes and the OA doesn't mind. 11:57, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * I fail to see enough to warrant a tweak, I'm sorry. I like how this image is, and it doesn't need any other stripes or anything of the sort added to it.
 * 12:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * the stripes are fine but the shading does need work. 12:03, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * I can't see the source nor the light on the legs, but I think it's just me. 12:04, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * Looks fine imo 12:08, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * Storm &#9835;  12:19, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:48, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt. W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Longtail.warrior.alt.png It was reverted to a brown version like the warrior and the elder, which were tweaked to extend the tail and make the image less orange, but the alt. warrior wasn't. 23:17, May 25, 2015 (UTC) Storm &#9835;  23:22, May 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:44, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * May I have this? I tweaked this image to lengthen the tail before when it was silver, and I can just as easily do it the same way again. 05:04, May 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:50, May 28, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:22, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Sandstorm.apprentice.alt.png damn, just when I'm finally happy with the design, alts need to match; I'm definitely keeping this design, though. Since the alt warrior was done first, I'll have to redo this to match it - and yes, I'd like it. 20:29, June 4, 2015 (UTC)


 * 22:04, June 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:29, June 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * Pretty sure we said this before, actually, that they need to match...idk, I can't remember.
 * 10:21, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * 07:35, June 11, 2015 (UTC)

Leaf (Alt. Ro) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Leaf (DTC).rogue.alt.png this is supposed to be longhaired, as the non alt rogue came first. 10:21, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * may I have this? 11:51, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:33, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * 07:40, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:10, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * Storm &#9835;  14:17, June 11, 2015 (UTC)

Tansypaw (Star) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Tansypaw.star.png The kit has darker ears. I would have brought it up when it was being tweaked to have stripes, but I haven't had a chance to get on the computer until today. 17:42, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * Also if the OA doesn't want this, I'd like it. 17:55, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * Mine. I just tweaked this. Storm  &#9835;  18:58, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * No problem. 19:10, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:11, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:00, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:25, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:25, June 11, 2015 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W) - Redo Nomination
File:Brackenfur.warrior.alt4.png I think it needs to match the apprentice image? Since "brown tabby" and "pale brown" are pretty much the same? It's mine, please, I'm the OA. 01:53, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * It should match, yes. You can always resuse the design you made if you want, though. I wouldn't object to that.
 * 02:09, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:00, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * 07:42, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 07:54, June 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt. D) - Redo Nomination
File:Sunstar.deputy.alt.png needs to match leader 02:02, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * No? He was only described as golden tabby as deputy so there's no need. Storm  &#9835;  02:07, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * May I have this? If the OA doesn't mind. 02:09, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think in this case, yellow tabby stripes is equating to golden, which makes sense. Also, Stealth, Beebs told me on Skype that she wants this. ^^
 * this be mine m8 12:36, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * my bad Storm  &#9835;  12:39, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:01, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * 07:43, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 07:55, June 11, 2015 (UTC)

Longtail ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Longtail.star.png etc minus the warrior. Okay, it would be simpler to just change the colour of the kit, apprentice and star to brown instead of reverting back, change the colour slightly to less orange then lengthen the tail. Also, the elder and warrior alt does not quite match the warrior in colour, and that one is on me. I'd like to tweak the colour more so it matches better. The apprentice's tail doesn't quite look long, so I'd just like to extend it different rather than stretching it. Since I'm the latest tweaker of them, I'd like the Alt warrior, Elder, and apprentice.

I'm also asking what we are going to do with the second alt warrior, are we just going to tweak the colours to make it silver then add stripes or are we using an older version of the warrior image. I'd say just use the previous warrior image. 06:51, June 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * I would actually like to help with this one- I tweaked the StarClan a while back as practice, so I'd really like to do that one. Also, the alt warrior can have stripes added to it- it's mine, and I still have the file, and matching those stripes is easy.
 * I actually just redid that tweak I mentioned, and I really like this, so is it possible that we use this as his pale brown image? It's got a couple different layers of coloring, and it's really simple to match.
 * The kit is mine. As the most recent OA of the Starclanner, you can have it if you want. 20:37 Thu Jun 11
 * Oooh, thank youuu.
 * 21:16, June 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * Do I have to re-tweak the warrior to match your starclanner? =/ 10:48, June 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * He looks pinkish with the warrior, and the stripes need to be black. How I did it is actually really easy to do and wouldn't take long at all. It's just a couple layers of coloring and more black on the stripes.
 * Sure. 12:00, June 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:48, June 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 15:14, June 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * -- 16:55, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Archeye (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Archeye.warrior.png Shading needs to be defined, and light on the legs as well. I'd like this if the OAs don't want it. Storm &#9835;  15:48, June 8, 2015 (UTC)

17:04, June 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:55, June 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:21, June 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:30, June 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * Sure, 08:33, June 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * nothing drastic. 10:21, June 10, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:18, June 13, 2015 (UTC)
 * 16:54, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Hawkfrost - Tweak Nomination
File:Hawkfrost.kit.png (all) Just like Bramblestar, these could serve to be darkened, but not too much. He's dark brown. I just want the kit, since I'm pretty sure I still have the file for it somewhere.
 * Could I have the apprentice? Storm  &#9835;  15:12, June 13, 2015 (UTC)
 * 15:30, June 13, 2015 (UTC)
 * Could I have the warrior? -- 18:58, June 13, 2015 (UTC)
 * May I have the deputy? 23:11, June 13, 2015 (UTC)
 * I was just going to ask for the deputy but you edited at the same time, I don't mind  23:18, June 13, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:34, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * Could I have the loner as well? Storm  &#9835;  00:42, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * Uh, what loner, Storm? 00:49, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * there is no loner because although he was a loner he was a kit as a loner so he just gets a kit version (I think). 00:52, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * my bad. Just the apprentice then lol Storm  &#9835;  01:01, June 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * -- 16:52, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Icewhisker (MC) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Icewhisker.mc.png ~ Shading could be defined on the head, and light on the paws (except maybe shading on the forepaw furthest from us) 10:22, June 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Storm &#9835;  13:01, June 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Please let me fix this holy crap it's my old shading. there's no source, and it looks so bad.
 * yes you may 18:08, June 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * I don't want this, I'm fine if you have it Jayce 21:28, June 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:36, June 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:17, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Little Mew ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Little Mew.kit.png Charart just needs to be female, and I think the tuft of lighter colored fur on her head needs to be more...tufty lol Storm  &#9835;  16:26, June 19, 2015 (UTC)


 * 22:08, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
 * Actually, may I have this? 03:57, June 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:21, June 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:10, June 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * The tuft is fine 13:51, June 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 17:37, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Brokenstar (DF) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Brokenstar.df.png I hate to be doing this to your image Burnt! >< There is a lineart gap in the tail, and he doesn't have torn ears. I've done the changes on the alt df which I'm uploading soon. Since Burntclaw is the OA, I'm assuming they want it. 22:37, June 27, 2015 (UTC)


 * Erm...I do believe burnt is a female........ Storm  &#9835;  22:57, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
 * Yeah I try to stay gender neutral but didn't this time. 23:28, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:34, June 27, 2015 (UTC)
 * Yes, I want it^^ 03:37, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 17:59, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:09, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:48, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt E) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Brokenstar.elder.alt.png he could probably be darkened some, he looks like a dark grey. idk if scarlet doesnt want this i do 18:33, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * A couple of shades darker 21:08, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:56, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:57, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 11:20, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:48, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:17, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt W) ~ Tweak nomination
File:Darkstripe.warrior.alt.png The shading looks a little flat, imho. 21:08, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * May I have this, if the OA doesn't want it? 21:59, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry, but I'd like this.
 * 00:58, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 11:20, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:47, July 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:17, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

Crowtail - Redo Nomination
File:Crowtail.star.png and the others. It's been said that black tabbies have faint stripes that are lighter than the main pelt color. According to Skye.
 * Mine. No exceptions. I already have an idea for her.
 * I nominated her because you said it
 * I think the stripes will be fainter than they are now. I am very confused on how black tabby colours work. 07:54, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * from what ive seen of black tabbies they do still have darker stripes, but tend to have a smokyness to their pelts, so im gonna have to say no. 08:40, July 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * Bramblesnow, I claimed it like that before someone else had the chance to- she's the only canon black tabby in the series and images are snipped faster than Garrus can kill something here.
 * What I meant was, I nominated her because you said you wanted to redo her but you didn't nominate her yet, and I was bored so I did it for you. Not trying to offense anyone though.
 * 14:44, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:09, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 18:09, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:25, July 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * Okay I talked to a vet about it. There are different types on black. The main fur of a black cat would be dull black with the stripes being shiny black. I think you have the right idea with the lighter stripes Skye, but make sure it's sort of a shiny black. 20:08, July 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * are we seriously going to redo this because of /realism/? come on guys. ginger cats shouldn't even have stripes unless they were described with them but if i bring that up we'd all go through some sort of huge argument that will result in someone leaving. here's something to think: we have a pure white cat with black paws and so we stuck to that, and unless there are actual problems with the image like shading/highlights, etc, then there is no reason for this to be redone 22:36, July 8, 2015 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt MC 3) - Tweak Nomination
File:Cinderpelt.mc.alt3.png The shading looks too... what's the word? Blocky and solid in places? It just makes the image look a bit odd, and I'd love to give the shading a tweak. Also, that texture has irritated me for ages - it looks a bit strange, and I'd like to either remove or redo it. Since this is my image, I'd like this. 14:49, July 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry Sorrel, but she looks just fine. 16:44, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * Its your image. If you believe you can do better, then go for it. 18:13, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * I agree with Breeze 18:25, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think it needs a good tweak, go for it. 22:39, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * Go for it 23:38, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry but I have to agree with Storm. 00:33, July 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * Eh... The texture is beautifully fine to me, but I think the shading should be lightened and maybe the herb shading should be defined. That's all.
 * It's fine. 23:13, July 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:56, July 8, 2015 (UTC)

Antpelt (W) - Tweak Nomination
File:Antpelt.warrior.png The shading could be defined and light as well. I'd like this if it passes. 16:45, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * Honestly, its fine. 18:10, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * Although, I think the scars don't have any shading over them. 22:39, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:39, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * the light source makes no sense to me at all tbh 00:33, July 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * as Foxy said
 * the definition of the shading is fine, but I agree that the light source needs a tweak 23:41, July 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * my bad, that's what i meant by light 23:58, July 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * ??? it looks fine, i literally don't know what any of you are talking about, it looks amazing actually. 23:14, July 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * Head shading and neck shading could be defined. Light source is perfectly fine and there is no need to change it. 23:56, July 8, 2015 (UTC)

Half Moon (Softpaw) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Half Moon.softpaw.png I don't know if it's just my screen or something, but the shading on this image seems barely-there and rather flat. Just a small tweak to define it. If it passes, I'd like this. 07:20 Sat Jul 11
 * While this has been nominated and didn't pass before, I personally can't see the shading. It might be my computer though- this thing handles blacks and whites oddly.
 * It's fine 12:03, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:30, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 16:42, July 11, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:42, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * I honestly can see the shading fine 00:54, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * A white cat.
 * This image has been nominated countless times already, so obviously more than one user sees fault. I say go for it. 21:23, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:56, July 12, 2015 (UTC)

Cedarstar (Star) - Tweak Nomination
File:Cedarstar.star.png I believe the white extends more in the Star than the leader; it's more on the chest for the star, but it's just the underbelly in the leader, as it says in the desc. 00:39, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * shouldnt this be just for the starclan charart? as the leader did come first. 00:41, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * I was literally on my way here to type that. The majority if not all the white on the star should be removed, me thinks - that's the chest, and the desc says underbelly. 00:43, July 12, 2015 (UTC)

tbh they are fine. 00:44, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think a little bit of the white could be removed, considering the placement on the leader 01:25, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * It wouldn't hurt. To me the light source kinda need to be touched anyway
 * also, Foxy pointed out that if he's 'very dark grey' he should be darkened. 09:59, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * also can i have this if this passes? 13:04, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:24, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:56, July 12, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Mistystar.leader.png (and the rest) she should be dark blue-grey. hers is the same case as bluestars pale fur, only for dark. neither was called dark blue-grey (or pale in bluestars case) yet bluestar is pale, so mistystar should be dark. I want the leader if it passes. 20:03, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 20:41, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * I want my queen 20:54, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * If no one minds can I have the apprentice? 20:56, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:26, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * can i have the deputy? 21:50, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * May I have the warrior? 21:56, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd like the kit.

Halftail ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Halftail.warrior.alt.png + elder/StarClan. Kinda nitpicky really, but seeing as half his tail was literally ripped off, I doubt there would be a perfect stump like is shown in these images. Just a tweak to add a bit of damage to the tail; as I said, nitpicky, and I understand if they don't end up passing. If these pass and none of the OA's come forward to claim them, I'd like these. 18:13 Sun Jul 12
 * it would work 20:41, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:25, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:50, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * Maybe make the end of the stump more jagged and crooked. 21:56, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:00, July 12, 2015 (UTC)

Blackstar (Deputy) - Tweak Nomination
File:Blackstar.deputy.png The shading looks kind of flat, and the light source should be defined overall. There's also no shading on the head. If this passes and the OA doesn't mind, I would like this.
 * 16:04, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 17:26, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * While you are at it, please add some pupils, since this image has none. 17:35, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * and the lightsource looks icky 21:49, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:56, July 12, 2015 (UTC)
 * 19:51, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Runningnose ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Runningnose.elder.png (and all except the kit, mca, and starclan I think) rhuemy eyes so we can get this over and done with, leader and elder are mine 09:17, July 14, 2015 (UTC)


 * 11:54 Tue Jul 14
 * 21:10, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * remind me what rheumy eyes would show in a charart? also i'd like the ones i worked on - aka the med cat 21:43, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * http://www.ezimba.com/work/150715C/ezimba13309876742000.png 21:48, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:26, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * Just gonna point out Runningnose was the medicine cat, not the leader lol 22:31, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * omg im dumb. this is what i get for not reading tigerclaw's fury ;-; 00:41, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * err, it only counts for elder and medicine cat because the cite is for just before Tigerclaw's leader ceremony, where he is techniquely leader. 00:50, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:10, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Tigerclaw was not leader of ShadowClan until he got his name, I think. Technically, Runningnose was still leader, I think.
 * 18:01, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 18:01, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Cedarstar (L) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Cedarstar.leader.png Needs to be darkened. 21:09, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * 21:11, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * If one of the OAs doesn't want this, may I have it? 22:26, July 14, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:50, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:09, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 18:01, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Starlingfeather (E) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Starlingfeather.elder.png Needs rheumy eyes. I'll take this if no one wants it. 00:50, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:09, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 09:39 Wed Jul 15
 * this is mine 09:47, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 18:02, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:49, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:05, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Purdy (E) (Alt.E) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Purdy.elder.png File:Purdy.elder.alt.png Needs rheumy eyes. The cite is from Dovewing's Silence so I don't think the kittypet or loner needs tweaking. I'd like the normal elder. 00:50, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:09, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * But I'm pretty sure David would want the normal elder. He's the OA, after all. 09:39 Wed Jul 15
 * honestly if possible i want both, i'm OA for both of them. otherwise i want the alt elder. 09:48, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 18:03, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:47, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:47, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Troutclaw ~ Redo Nomination
File:Troutclaw.elder.png and others. Okay, a lot of this is out of just...dislike for the pattern I can up with for the elder, but in my opinion, I don't think the stripes are incredibly realistic. Honestly all I did was scribble on the trackpad to get the pattern. I want the elder if this passes, but if David doesn't want the Star or kit, I'd like them too. 11:52 Wed Jul 15
 * scribbleclaw
 * id like the starclan but you can have the kit 13:24, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * it looks fine. 13:54, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * are we still going to argue about realism in the warriors series? 14:26, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * If you believe you can do better, then I say go for it. 18:05, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think it's good to try to stick with realism, for some reasons our brains really love realism. I agree it looks a bit messy and unrealistic, so go for it. 22:41, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:47, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Star) (Alt.Star) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Yellowfang.star.png File:Yellowfang.star.alt.png needs rheumy eyes. It's mentioned in Leafpool's Wish so I don't think she needs her other images tweaked. I'd like the alt star. 00:50, July 15, 2015 (UTC)


 * alt star's is mine as I'm the OA 00:55, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 05:15, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * the star is mine since I was the recent OA before Knight, who isn't here anymore 06:22, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 09:37 Wed Jul 15
 * 18:03, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 18:03, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudtail (Warrior) (Apprentice) - Tweak Nomination
File:Cloudtail.warrior.png File:Cloudtail.apprentice.png The shading looks very sharp - it should be blurred some more, I think. 03:04, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * the apprentice is fine 03:07, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Mine.
 * just a little bit 04:16, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Apprentice is mine if no one minds. I love him
 * I already have both images claimed, sorry. I'm the most recent OA in the entire set and I'd like to keep it that way, as I have the files.
 * 09:36 Wed Jul 15
 * Oops. Get used to me being a dumb dumb. Mistakened something :P
 * 13:54, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * 19:13, July 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Not too much, I love this shading style. 22:36, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Ottersplash - Tweak Nomination
File:Ottersplash.warrior.png etc. This isn't white splashed. This is ginger with white paws. Having white splashes and all, more white can be added to her. I want the queen. Foxy claims the warrior, as she last tweaked it. 13:43, July 22, 2015 (UTC)


 * 14:27, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * 14:34, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * It's fine? Let's not take Roo's last image. <_<   15:38, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * 20:57, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * white 'splashes' essentially just means patches >.> 23:04 Wed Jul 22
 * exactly- this isn't white patched. This is plain ginger and white. White patched would be something like Pigeonpaw or Brightheart's alt quenn, imo. This is just pointing out, not telling you to change your vote. 23:09, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * It's fine. 23:24, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * It doesn't look patched, patched is more like the examples Burnt gave 23:51, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:54, July 23, 2015 (UTC)

Scourge (K) ~ Tweak Nomination
file:Scourge.kit.png Alright, so I was flipping through the Scourge manga, and a thought came to me. Shouldnt we add the first tooth he received on the collar of his kit image? If I recall correctly, he didnt get the later teeth until he was well out of kithood. (Dont quote me on that though). Agree or disagree, its up to y'all. 00:29, July 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * but the kit image could be from any time in his kithood? Also, these blanks are so damn small, so I don't understand how that would even be possible? ...and since this is my image, I'd like it. Would anyone object to a shading tweak as well?
 * Shading could be defined yeah. There's also a couple pixels of white leaking onto his tail 00:48, July 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd say he did get that tooth when he was still young, and that counts. Yes have that white removed from his tail but I think the shading is fine, although it could be defined on his white paw. 01:42, July 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * 04:28, July 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * 10:49, July 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:59, July 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * Honestly, I don't think it's worth it. It's not a physical change to him, it's basically just a costume change. Not worthy of a tweak, imo. 14:02 Sat Jul 18
 * I agree with Berry. Basically all it needs to do is be edited. Doesn't really need a tweak. (But I also don't wanna vote no because it does need to be edited, heh.) I c  i  l  o  o    00:47, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:58, July 22, 2015 (UTC)

Silverstream (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Silverstream.warrior.png The light source needed defining overall, and the light needs to be defined on all four legs as well. Feel free to disagree though. I want this if it passes. 12:54, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * Honestly, I think this is fine. But Sunjaw, you won't be able to claim this image if it does pass. Only warriors and above can tweak images, and I'm not even sure if you're in the project...o.o 13:00 Wed Jul 22
 * Berry, they are a warrior o.o 13:01, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * My apologies, I didn't look close enough. Ignore mE 13:03 Wed Jul 22
 * It's an understandable mistake...I have been swamped with a class, so I haven't been as active... 13:07, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * The shading also looks a little flat, maybe that's just me... 14:42, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * Also, the stripes should be defined. 15:38, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * I've been thinking to nominate this for a while. Shading seems over blurred 20:54, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:24, July 22, 2015 (UTC)

Toadskip ~ Redo Nomination
File:Toadskip.warrior.png I know cloudy said not to nominate any of my images but idk I'd like to nominate this one. The stripes are kinda icky and so are the white patches...they're more gray than white and the shading is really off everywhere. 21:51, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * I meant others nominating it, not you. If you nominate it, that's another story... I say go for it.. you don't have the file to tweak it anyways- pretty sure that was on an old computer of yours.


 * Honestly, I think it looks fine - but the patches on the main body could be whitened a bit. 21:55, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * Yeah also agreeing with Sorrel. The patches can be lightened, but that doesn't require a redo. 22:04, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry but I'm also going to add that the shading is way too dark and it's not even in the right places. 22:05, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:47, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * I actually like this. Just go for a tweak on the patches though 03:22, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * As I said (considering that I want this) I wouldn't be able to tweak the patches. 03:23, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I love this image and I wouldn't want it to get redone. 03:25, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * Here's what I'm gonna propose: You guys seem to like the stripes and the patches, but the shading seriously annoys me and there's no way I can tweak this image without redoing it. If this passes, I'd like to redo this but keep the stripe pattern and the white pattern. 03:35, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * In that case, I think redoing it wouldn't hurt. 03:44, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * 05:34, July 22, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">13:01 Wed Jul 22

Moonflower (K) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Moonflower.kit.png I hate to be nominating this again, but the stripes do not match at all. On her other images, they are darker, and are smudged, not blurred. Also, I know it's a kit blank, but the placement is so icky: it's too "horizontally" placed while it's more curvy on the other images. So basically I'd like to redo those stripes, as I still have the file. And if I haven't made it clear, I want it since I'm the OA. 04:00, July 21, 2015 (UTC)


 * Yeah the stripes don't seem thick enough... but that's probably because it's such a tiny blank. 04:04, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * The stripes match just fine. And as Stealthfire pointed out, it's a tiny blank so it's not going to match 100%. <span style title="Bush did 9/11"> I  c    i    l  <span style title="9/11 was perpetrated by our own government to justify the evasion of Iraq"> o  <span style title="Where was bush during 9/11?"> o   04:05, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * It's not just the thickness, the stripes don't seem to match the placement at all. It doesn't swirl as much and are too uniform. 04:22, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * The stripe style doesn't quite match, and if Fox wants to tweak it, go for it. 15:02, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * While I see the stripes could match a little bit better, this is a small blank, therefore trying to get everything to match properly isn't going to be something that can be easily done. For this, though, I think they match well enough... but "wanting to tweak it" isn't a good enough reason to vote yes on this.
 * Since I'm guessing that was directed at me, my main reason for voting yes on this was for the first thing I stated- the stripe style does not quite match, they are more horizontal compared to the other images' swirly stripes, and I think that's enough for a tweak 15:48, July 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * Agreeing with Skye. It is a small blank, and you can't make it match 100% bc of that.
 * Why didn't you put this under a redo nomination? It's kind of impossible to tweak it... Well, the stripes /are/ more horizontal on this than her other images.
 * Yeah, I think the stripes need to swirl a bit more. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:17, July 26, 2015 (UTC)

Milkfur - Tweak Nomination
File:Milkfur (WC).deputy.png he should be lightened a little bit, I think, to look more white and I think the shading could be lightened a bit. Feel free to disagree with me though 14:37, July 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * Ya mabey a shade or two lighter and I agree about the shadeing. Belllastar (talk) 20:10, July 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * Eh, I think it's fine. Not enough to cause a fuss over, imho.
 * He looks more beige to me, honestly. Making him a little more creamy white wont hurt anything. 22:01, July 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd thought he'd be more lighter than cream-coloured cats. 22:11, July 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * Can I have this? 22:29, July 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * The shading is fine, and really, I honestly think the color is too 22:40, July 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think it's the added shading on the tweak after I posted my version that's throwing it off. Might I suggest reverting it to my version and adding another layer of colored shading to give him depth instead?  05:48, July 17, 2015 (UTC)
 * I like Ivy's idea, actually. ^^ I'd change my vote if we went with what he suggests.
 * Eh. 04:27, July 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think Ivy's idea, too. 10:50, July 18, 2015 (UTC)
 * ditto to the above w/ others 02:54, July 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * just saying, Ivy's version doesn't have a light source... I don't know
 * Sorry, but Ivy's is the exact same color, it's just that the shading is darker, and I don't think that the color was light enough from the start, nevermind the shading. If it were just cream, but for creamy-white, and for being named after milk, I really think it needs to be lightened, if only a little. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:15, July 26, 2015 (UTC)

Redstar ~ Redo Nomination
File:Redstar.leader.png, kit and Star as well. They're clearly Y and triangle tabbies, which we don't usually like to see, and the colour doesn't look very dark ginger to me...? Just ginger. Feel free to vote nay on these because they are very nice images — but if it passes, I'd like them all. <span style="">12:11 Wed Jul 29
 * I know I can't vote yet, but I'd like to point out that the only thing I see fault with the images, is that the leader image is too bright of a ginger to match the other two. There's really nothing wrong with triangle tabbies. 12:20, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * I always thought they looked unnatural to me 12:22, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * The kit and the StarClan must match the leader, not the other way around, Winter. Also, triangle tabbies are not permitted for PCA chararts any longer. We did away with that years ago.
 * Ohhh, alright. 12:27, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * alright 13:10, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:34, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * 15:23, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * 15:27, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">03:17 Fri Jul 31

Rowanstar (BS) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Rowanstar (BS).leader.png (and the others) honestly if redstars are considered y tabbies then so is rowanstar :V and he also isnt dark. i want the deputy and warrior if it passes, jayce will probably want his leader. 13:04, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * You can bet your sheepy butt that I want my leader image.
 * <span style="">13:07 Wed Jul 29
 * Can i have the apprentice? 13:18, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:20, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:32, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * 15:23, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * 15:28, July 29, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">03:17 Fri Jul 31

Feathertail - Redo Nomination

 * File:Feathertail.star.png  please don't yell at me   and all the others (kit, apprentice, warrior.) She doesn't look much silver gray at all - more of a dark gray. Her stripes seem like a y tabby and in general her shading kinda looks messy. Don't yell at me. If this passes I'd like the kit and warrior...  00:11, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * Also, Splook wants the starclan and apprentice. For some reason its not letting her edit so I'm claiming for her heh 00:48, July 31, 2015 (UTC)

Hey hello I am here. I have to agree, a this image, though pretty, is not a silver tabby. This is a silver tabby. The coat is way lighter, and the stripes are thick and dark. :> <span style="">00:49 Fri Jul 31 I love that image. Obviously that's not the main reason. Okay Splook, she's silver-gray, not silver, which means she can have darker stripes, not black. and her base color looks fine to be called silver-gray. And not all tabbies are classic/marbled tabbies which have thick, dark stripes like you mentioned. I think she looks mackerel tabby enough to be considered fine. Personally, I don't see much problem with the shading either. If you still think she's a Y-tabby, I'll say perhaps the StarClan one - her warrior, apprentice and kit images look nothing like Y-tabbies. Just saying...
 * Alright, I decided to look up a silver-gray tabby and found this . The pelt is darker than pure silver, and the stripes are lighter than black, and a different style. I understand that the stripes don't necessarily have to be black and of that pattern, I was just mainly collecting an example for the pelt color. I love Feathertail's current image, don't get me wrong, it's just that the "silver" in the image is mainly from the highlights. I just think that her current color is more gray than silver, and if anything, should be lightened a bit.  <span style="">03:13 Fri Jul 31
 * Burntclaw...I'm sorry but I don't know how you can't see the amount of y stripes on the pixels. :/  03:18, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'm not Burnt :P I really think the stripes are fine, at least on her other images(other than StarClan). If anyone thinks she should be lightened, tweak it maybe but it's not worth a redo.
 * I'm sorry but I agree with bramble. 06:36, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * I am Burntclaw, and i think there images are alright. She is silver gray, not silver. She is also not really a Y tabby. 06:40, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * Actually, that's not silver-gray. It's much too dark to be considered that. Silver gray is lighter than that- this is a darker neutral gray. I don't see how you can lighten that without drastically changing the stripes anyways. I say just redo it, as it really doesn't seem to fit her description. Also, given that she's been said to have Silverstream's same silver pelt, and she's also been called both light and pale, it makes sense to redo this to accurately match her description. It does not as it currently is.
 * Yeah,she's a bit too dark 10:05, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * She is not silver gray, silver gray is much lighter than this. And if she's been described as light/pale, there's no way this fits that description. 11:54, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * just no. 18:38, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * if she was described as looking just like her mother, than she should be redone to atleast resemble her in color. 23:16, July 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it can be tweaked but in no way needs to be entirely redone  04:53, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hollyleaf ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Hollyleaf.kit.png and all others. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post this here, but all of Hollyleaf's images seem like they're a darker gray color. If you look at Hollytuft's page and image, she's mentioned to look almost exactly like Hollyleaf. Also, the kit, apprentice, mca, and warrior image all look like they could have shading defined as well. So overall, I'm saying Hollyleaf's images could be darkened a bit, with some shading definition to the others mentioned? 22:51, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * Been saying this for a very long time now. I'd like the StarClan and warrior.
 * I'd like the loner 22:59, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * Definitely. Can I have the MCA and the apprentice? 23:01, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * Can I have the kit? 00:44, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * I still think these are fine. Not all black cats are that dark. She doesn't have to 100% match Hollytuft, either. 06:45, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * Actually, they do need to match. Hollytuft is a spitting image of Hollyleaf, and there is no such thing as "light black"- this is not black. Crowfeather is dark gray and his images are darker than hers.
 * 09:34, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">16:57 Fri Jul 31

Troutclaw (K) - Tweak Nomination
File:Troutclaw.kit.png Okay, I was meaning to tweak it while it was still up but I found that it was archived lol. Basically I have made the stripes too dark- especially on the head, which now he looks like a silver cat and doesn't match his other images at all. I'd like this, if I may, being the redone artist. 10:57, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 10:59, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">11:38 Thu Jul 30
 * 11:54, July 30, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:07, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:47, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:12, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

02:33, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Piketooth ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Piketooth.warrior.png His description says he has protruding canine teeth, so his charart needs to have that. 14:27, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * Stonetooth shows that, so this should too.
 * Aleks will likely want this, so no one should claim it yet. <span style="">14:30 Sat Aug 1
 * 14:43, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">16:24 Sat Aug 1
 * 21:39, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:12, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Redscar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Redscar.mc.png and StarClan. He is described as reddish-brown, but all I can see is brown? If anything, he should look closer to Pinestar, imo. 01:50, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * this was nominated a while ago and I still stand on my view. The main fur is too brown and the stripes are too red. It's unrealistic. 02:11, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * Can we not touch the stripe pattern though? I love it a lot :c Also, I think Cloudy will want this one. 02:13, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * I will want this- I still have the file from the last time I tweaked it- Shelly sent it to me lmao
 * I still think it could be tweaked. 03:42, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * im not voting but the starclan is mine 09:32, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * and tbh he wont be able to be as dark as pinestar because otherwise you wont be able to see the stripes: if anything he should look like pinestar with stripes, but thats just my onion. 11:16, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:49, August 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">01:26 Mon Aug 3

Breezepelt ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Breezepelt.apprentice.png Dunno,maybe just the higlights,but i think he looks lighter compared to his his other images. 10:14, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 10:20, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 10:21, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:08, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:08, August 4, 2015 (UTC)

Stormfur - Redo Nomination
kit (and the rest of the set) You can only tweak images so many times before it becomes odd. Anyways, none of the images really match in color, and none of them seem dark gray at all. Dark gray is dark gray, and these are much more of a neutral shade over anything. The prey hunter and cave-guard would be a pain to tweak, and for the sake of coloring and my sanity, I would like to just redo the entire set...which also means I'd like to claim the entire set. Shoot me if you want, but I really feel these are much too light, and it would just be easier to redo them since they're all solids. You can't just slap a layer of shading on it and call it darker- it's not the same thing.


 * make him smexy <span style="">14:27 Tue Aug 4
 * Actually, I think the loner is dark enough. But the other images don't match the loner...
 * The loner may be slightly darker, but it's still kind of a medium gray - I think it should be included in this. 16:21, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * The nomination is for all images. As I think the loner is also too light, it is also included in this.
 * it's the loner's shading. 21:54, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:45, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:57, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Breezepelt (K) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Breezepelt.kit.png I tried to get this out before Breezepelt's apprentice thing was archived, but I really believe that he needs some shading definition. 23:53, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:45, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:56, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:11, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 04:43, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * may i have this? 05:08, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:17, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

Cody (KP) - Tweak Nomination
File:Cody.kittypet.png She kinda looks like she's got triangle stripes to me. 17:05, August 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * 19:25, August 3, 2015 (UTC)
 * something about it doesn't seem right, there's too much space between stripes I think, and does it match the queen? 03:16, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 05:36, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:24, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
 * Stealth, the queen needs to match the kittypet, not the other way around. The kittypet is the first image in the set, since the queen was redone with new blanks.
 * uh... 00:46, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:11, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * may I have this? 03:00, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:16, August 5, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd like the queen if Foxy only meant for the kittypet?
 * wouldn't this also affect the queen too? 08:29, August 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * It would affect the queen, and nothing is being tweaked until we decide what to do with the other image- we can't tweak one for stripes without needing to tweak the other, and all this nomination is for is the kittypet. We don't just pick whichever one "looks better" or whichever one is at the top of the page and redo/tweak all images to match that.
 * Would this actually warrant a redo? I think they are both actually tweakable. I just finished a tweaked version of Cody. here is it, I don't really know... 11:51, August 6, 2015 (UTC)
 * they're both tweakable, honestly. 02:16, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * The queen's mine because I did it ;; And even then the stripes are going to be larger, considering the belly is expanding.  02:40, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * The queen's mine because I did it ;; And even then the stripes are going to be larger, considering the belly is expanding.  02:40, August 7, 2015 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt Ki) ~ Redo nomination
File:Thornclaw.kit.alt.png This needs to match the alt app, as that came first and alts have to match. I assume Skye would want this. 08:56, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * Actually, the alt kit was redone after Berry's image, (and before we started enforcing the 'alts need to match' thing) so it would be the alt kit that gets redone, not the alt apprentice.
 * oops. I changed it. 11:56, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * and nah, I don't want it.
 * may I have this? 12:00, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * Such a shame, this image is gorgeous. 12:01, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * if whoever gets this wants the file/colours to the apprentice i can try to dig it up but i think i lost it <span style="">12:09 Fri Aug 7
 * 14:14, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * 00:27, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Stone Song (P3) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Stone Song (P3).kit.png etc. If he's dark gray I think he could be darkened. 11:42, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * uh okay 12:05, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * If this passes can I have the sharpclaw? 13:47, August 7, 2015 (UTC)
 * Honestly, the ancient is fine, but the rest yes. May I have the kit? 00:25, August 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * 15:12, August 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:45, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">01:51 Sun Aug 9

Reedshine (CotC) - Tweak Nomination
File:Reedshine (CotC).warrior.png Given that she was called dark orange, I think that this could be darkened. 16:14, August 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd like this.
 * and maybe a little more orange. Am I seeing a pattern somewhere here 22:49, August 8, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:38, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:40, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">01:50 Sun Aug 9

Cody (Q) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Cody.queen.png same reason as the kittypet, it's a triangular tabby, I think. 04:31, August 9, 2015 (UTC)


 * it doesn't quite match the kittypet's stripes. 05:06, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * its fine. 05:18, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * just the legs, don't touch anything else. 10:05, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * this is mine as being OA 11:53, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * 11:56, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">11:57 Sun Aug 9

Hollowbelly (Star) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Hollowbelly.star.png the shading could use a bit of defining; I can barely see it. if Teldy doesn't want this, i do. <span style="">09:55 Sun Aug 16
 * the warrior too, if possible? The shading seems flat as well. 10:03, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * 12:51, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * 14:41, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * Agreeing with Burnt. 20:17, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">16:44 Mon Aug 17

Pixie (Lo) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Pixie.loner.png should have a collar. idk if this is actually major enough for a tweak but whatever <span style="">18:30 Fri Aug 21
 * It's major enough.
 * 19:09, August 21, 2015 (UTC)'
 * <span style="">20:10 Fri Aug 21
 * 20:11, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * 20:14, August 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * Songheart (talk) 21:23, August 21, 2015 (UTC)Songheart
 * Songheart, only warriors can vote as stated in the guidelines. May I have this? 22:40, August 21, 2015 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) - Tweak Nomination
File:Stonestar.deputy.png Flat shading. Leg shading is near to being non-existent. I'd like this if it passes. 13:03, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * true 13:06, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:29, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * 13:58, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * light source needs defining too. 21:40, August 23, 2015 (UTC)
 * Light source is fine, imho. The only thing I think it needs is a leg shading tweak. Overly defined light sources aren't mandatory and you can see it just fine.
 * agreeing with cloudy 02:30, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lizardfang (E) - Tweak Nomination
File:Lizardfang.elder.png Shading is near to non-existant. I'd like this if it passes. Storm &#9835;  12:55, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * I see it but it's flat. 14:29, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * 14:52, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * It is visible, but as was said it's flat. 20:30, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * ^ 21:40, August 24, 2015 (UTC)
 * The shading is also leaking :P 00:16, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:30, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sweetpaw - Tweak Nomination
File:Sweetpaw.star.png File:Sweetpaw.kit.png the shading on both of these images look a bit flat. if this passes, may i have the kit? <span style="">00:13 Tue Aug 25
 * the apprentice also looks gray, and I'd like the StarClan image, should Ivy not ask for it himself.
 * 00:14, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 02:30, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 03:10, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * Agreeing about the apprentice. May I have it? 04:09, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Russetfur - Tweak Nomination
File:Russetfur.kittypet.png The shading on the haunch is a little strange due to where the light source comes from, the shading looks flat too. If the OA wants it or anyone else, take it. I dont want it. 00:28, August 25, 2015 (UTC)


 * 02:29, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * <span style="">02:39 Tue Aug 25
 * 03:09, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * may I have it then? 04:12, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 20:08, August 25, 2015 (UTC)

Red (SD) - Redo Nomination
File:Red (SD).kit.png It should match the rogue. The stripes dont look like they match the other photo. 20:40, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * 22:25, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * I think it's fine, if anything it could be darkened a little, and that's an easy tweak. <span style="">22:29 Tue Aug 25
 * 22:42, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * The stripes are much to thick and triangular to match the rogue version. sorry Vixen. 22:45, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * ^ 23:08, August 25, 2015 (UTC)
 * if this passes, I would like this. 01:21, August 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:31, August 26, 2015 (UTC)
 * 01:31, August 26, 2015 (UTC)