Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Folder for images that had been up for approval before the beginning of Tweak Week. 

Start of Tweak Week
Everyone, please remember to view the guidelines before posting on this page, so you know what you're doing. Make sure to put in as much effort as possible to follow all the guidelines so this can run as smoothly as possible. I will be away until Saturday at a camp, and on my return I will expect there to have been no major arguments or fights. You all are members of this Project; act professionally and maturely. If you have any questions, please address them to any of the Project leads after checking the guidelines to make sure they are not already answered there. Leads, should any problems arise, deal with the situation efficiently and calmly and resolve the problem as swiftly as you can. Use some independent intelligence, as I won’t be here to deal with the situation until I return. I know I can count on you. Good luck everyone, and have fun. :) This can be archived later. Bram ble 04:43, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Question
For the new chararts, do we upload them on the current images? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 04:57, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Question is answered in the guidelines, right at the top. Did you not read them? --Bram ble 05:08, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I only skimmed, so I must have missed it. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 05:09, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, after tweak week is over, all our chararts that were here before will be returned to the page right? Sorry, I've never been through a tweak week before :) Night  Fall 06:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Kit)- Stripe Removal
- As I feel best editing my own images ( and usually keep the xcf files on hand, anyway) I decided to start with her. I removed the stripes, as I was supposed too. Dark hallows 06:04, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any issues with it. The only difference I can find between it and the original is the stripes, obviously. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 06:47, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome :) Blur the white transition on the tail tip though Night  Fall 06:48, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred ^^. Dark hallows 06:52, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a tad ♥Ice  shine★  15:02, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on her head. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Q)
Original user was Sandwich989. The improvements are changing it from whatever that yellowish color was to pale ginger, having ear pink consistent with kit, warrior, and apprentice, shading issues, and adding a torn ear. Since it was a make-over, I also made an alternate version with stripes. Suggestions? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 06:19, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Seeing as none of her other versions have stripes I'd go with number one. Which I see nothing wrong with. I'm going to wait to see other's opinions, though.

This is really good :) Make her a bit more gingery though, she still looks kind of yellow Night  Fall 06:34, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 06:43, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink smaller. ♥Ice shine★  15:06, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? :) -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 17:34, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Is there a way you can make it more ginger? Darken the eye colour--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:09, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) Redone
Alright, she needed to have the shading and highlights style fixed. I tried to do this without completely redoing the image, but I couldn't :/ So, I changed the shading and highlights style, and I made the ear pink the color of her kit image; as it was very purple before. Okay, how does she look? Night Fall 06:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading on the back of her neck/behind her ear. Dark hallows 06:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added shading behind ear Night  Fall 06:47, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the head ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added head shading Night  Fall 18:45, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Bluestar (W)
So, I re-did the image, and I am sorry, but I do not know who made the image before. I wasn't sure if I should add the scar, so please tell me if I should. εСћб ђэάѓτ  11:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

i think should not cause was it seen on her leader or older warrior image? otherwise this is really good apart from the shading under the neck that i think is supposed to be there but i dont know  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 12:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading, ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I darkened the shading and blurred the highlights. εСћб ђэάѓτ  16:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but perhaps make the ear pink a bit bigger? insane brick'd 16:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto insane. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made ear pink bigger. How's it now? εСћб ђэάѓτ  17:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading needs serious blurring. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   18:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Is it okay? εСћб ђэάѓτ  18:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. The blue is a little dark--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit, she looks very dark compared to her other images Night  Fall 18:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (W) -
Okay, so I got rid of the mottled parts, (if you didn't notice, some mottled spots were there) re-did the shading, added highlights, and re-did the ear pink. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do that...but, comments? ♥Ice shine★  14:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I dont see anything that needs fixing or the mistakes are hardly seen to me so good job  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 14:32, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink could be a bit longer. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 17:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Goldenpaw on the ear pink. Also, blur the highlights a bit more. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:30, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Made ear pink longer. I can't blur the highlights. ♥Ice shine★  17:37, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are a bit too concentrated, and the highlight on the shoulder should be a tad bit taller. Blur the ear pink some more.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 17:56, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Old Chararts
I know it's Tweak Week, but when can we re-post the chararts that we might've had up for approval? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:35, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

When Tweak Week is over, Bramble will move back the chararts that were previously up for approval - right now they've been moved to a protected page to preserve all discussions and such that were going on before Tweak Week. insane brick'd 15:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. Thanks! ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:40, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W)
All she needed was a torn ear. Comments? Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   17:43, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is fine. But I also think the shading and ear pink could be darkened and the markings could be blurred more--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:05, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

There's a few pixels missing on the head lineart.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:08, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (L) - Redone
I'm pretty happy with this. Comments?--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:06, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Er...was it in the make over section? ♥Ice shine★  19:08, July 6, 2010 (UTC)