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Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feet shading still needs to be darkened. 00:26 Tue Nov 15

Oh, and she needs a torn ear as well. 00:34 Tue Nov 15

One thing, with highlights I just really can't use them without having bad shading. I will try to blur the shading, but I hope everyone can understand that highlights are bad for the chararts I make. 03:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I guess it's better now...

Make the ear nick a little thicker. 05:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The paws still need to be darkened. Just to clarify, right now they're lighter than the rest of the legs and that makes pretty much no sense with the current light source (or what appears to be the current light source). They need to match the colour at the top of the legs if not be darker than that. 04:50 Wed Nov 16

Reuploaded. 01:31, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. 08:05, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Timberfur (D) - Redone
I'm surprised no-one re-did him yet. Original artist was Mousetalon, and he needed to be longhaired. 18:34, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make him greying? It says in his page that he is. 18:47, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't sure if his whole body was greying, so I just added a greying muzzle. 18:54, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'd maybe define the muzzle more and maybe make it lighter. 00:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:19, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pupil? 02:43, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

There's a pupil >_>. There was a discussion about it, and it was agreed this eye style was okay. 02:52, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the earpink. 00:23 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded 01:24, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to be lightened a tad so it matches the warrior. Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:47, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was thinking the same thing. I made him duller also, since he's greying. 18:01, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is going to sound stupid, but it's not consistant in colors with his warrior image....why? Eh, whatever. Darken the shading, please. 08:08, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Didn't you read...? 21:41, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Archeye (W) - Tweaked
I dont know if its redone or tweaked, I redoned stripes and shadings.. OA was Insaneular.. Leaf-storm,14:11,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Ups, changes arent showing Leaf-storm,14:13,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Why is the lineart in between his haunch and his tail gone? 16:08, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That's the old version. 16:21, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

i dont like when changes arent showing Leaf-storm,16:48,November 13,2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list, but could you make the ear-pink less purple. 22:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was on the list Leaf-storm,12:57,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Reupladed, late, sorry I wasn't on my computer before Leaf-storm,13:38,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and shading. 00:21 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded, 15:15,November 15,2011 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be darker, and darken the highlights/shading on the haunch or brighten the highlights/lighten the shading on the shoulder. Blur the stripes as well. 04:52 Wed Nov 16

Also dull the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:39, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste in the triangle where the haunch and the paws are separated. Also, near the front paws. 21:34, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,10:12,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more red than purple, and sharpen the edges of the stripes by smudging them. 23:59 Fri Nov 18

Willowpelt (W) - Tweaked
Blurred shadings and added some more, OA is Bramble Leaf-storm,14:53,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the shading on her paws. 16:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:30,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the neck shading and lighten the shading on the middle of the haunch. Blur all shading. 22:59 Sun Nov 13

Next comment will be blur the shadings more yes? I do it..but I dont have much time now Leaf-storm,13:46,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload the image? Also, try to match the shading to this tutorial about shading 'cause right now the shading doesn't make much sense. 00:18 Tue Nov 15

I make it tomorrow because on this computer I have hight brightness and I cant see the shadings correctly. 19:58,November 15,2011 (UTC)

Free time! Yes! It looks really bad, sorry 10:23,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the stomach to match the haunch shading closer. 00:00 Sat Nov 19

Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
Added longer tail. Original artist was Sandy, redone by Scarlet. Comments? Elorisa  18:24, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks a little odd... When I added it to the list, I pictured it being expanded at the middle, so that it was roughly the same shape, but longer. Make sense? 18:28, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded; Better? ''' Elorisa   18:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, perfect :) 18:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip of the tail a bit pointier and erase the waste around the tail. 22:45 Sun Nov 13

Are you still working on this, Elorisa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:06, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

If she's not going to work on it, I'll glady take over. I love playing with the lineart on images. =) 08:09, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it, I just haven't gotten around to reuploading it. I'll have it uploaded either later today or tommorow. -- Elorisa   20:10, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (Ki)- Redone
She needed to match the other images... OA was Darkhallows. Constructiments? 19:32, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her paws a bit. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 00:36, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:24, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes just a bit. Me lufs this. 05:13, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

One side of the earpink seems to be darker, but if it's not, ignore me. And..the soft white chest....*steals* <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:51, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Neep... I forgot to fix the earpink.. I'll get that in a sec. 04:56, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

---Fixed. :3 04:59, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (E) - Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Spottedwing, then I'm guessing Nightfall101 tweaked it. Comments? 20:41, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, if any. 21:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink, please. :3 Awesome! 02:09, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink larger and more triangular. <span style="">00:08 Thu Nov 17

Darken the shading - 01:18, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Guardian, the shading doesn't need to be darker. It's fine. Okay, since Snowy sorta left, is anyone else going to work on this, or should we decline it? 17:07, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) - Tweaked
This pretty much looks redone, but I DID tweak it. :P The white was placed in unnatural places, the patches needed to be smudged, and the shading needed to be defined. Ugh, I suck at torties. DX Anyways, OA was -Bracken I think. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:10, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. <span style="">00:11 Thu Nov 17

It doesnt need defining, just the highlight or unshaded part. - 03:09, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
I'm the OA, and I felt I could have done much better with the stripes than I originally did. I got permission from Scarlet to do this. Comments? 05:25, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is much better. xD Define the ear pink - I'm having trouble seeing it. 05:29, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:51, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add grey paws, since he was described with them? 21:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Different book, different rank. I believe he was either a kit or an apprentice at that point. 21:20, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Since we don't know, maybe add a TINT of gray? This is awesome! 22:08, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

The grey paws were in Eclipse I think, and as a kit. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:46, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that was the book he became an apprentice. He definitely wasn't a warrior at that point. 00:14, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rainsplash (D) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading to make it darker. OA was Sandy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 16:59, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blu rthe ear pink a bit. <span style="">22:10 Thu Nov 17

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 93.97.191.4 18:25, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud (E)- Tweaked
Shading tweak. OA is Sandstar12.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 21:29, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <span style="">22:13 Thu Nov 17

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading. 12:28, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (W) - Redone
Layered the warrior lineart over the original. It's bad, bad, bad. Those tail stripes are really bugging me... Anyway, comments? 21:47, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and OA is Dawnfeather. 21:47, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! I wish I could do this good at chararts! Blur the ear pink. And make it a little bit bigger, <span style="">22:06 Thu Nov 17

It's the exact same earpink as the deputy. 22:08, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's the same colour as the deputy, but shouldn't it be more like Russetfur's colour? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:10, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that? 22:25, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'm almost sure that's a highlight, but could you blur the highlight/shading on the tail? -- 21:21, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yep, it's a highlight. 21:31, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (D) - Tweaked
He needed a scar on his shoulder. 22:35, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scar a little. <span style="">23:54 Thu Nov 17

Isn't this your fourth? You already are doing Pinestar (KP), Mosskit (K), and Rowanclaw (W)... Correct me if I'm wrong. 00:55, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I am such a failure. I forgot to archive them D: Thanks for reminding me! 02:34, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, re-uplaoded. 02:51, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Who's the OA? ;) 03:38, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... Sandwich989 I think? 12:29, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sandwich did the original image, but the one you're working with right now is Icestorm's. I think you should mention everyone that worked on it. ;) 17:35, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Graystripe (W) - Tweaked
I took the colours from the deputy image, and copied the torn ear exactly. Original artist is Sandstar(?), and I was supposed to blur the shading, but just re-did it, and it needed to have a torn ear. Comments? 22:58, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

One side of the torn ear has thicker lineart. <span style="">23:52 Thu Nov 17

I don't think it really matters, it's a torn ear anyways. 00:24, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Did you have permission...? 00:34, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Want me to ask right now? :) 01:01, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I see no need. I wanted to put it on the redo list anyways. There were so many issues with it, if you ask me. 02:39, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, thin out the tear in the ear, where it dips. Get rid of a pixel or two - it looks too thick. 08:02, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm keeping the tear like that for consistency. 21:58, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was hollyberry; redone to be reddish brown. I took all colors from Oakheart, so I am not changing any colors. 00:11, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does the red part of his description mean that he needs stripes? :\ 00:13, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

He's red-brown, which is the same as reddish brown. Oakheart and Pinestar are reddish browna nd they don't need stripes, so I'm not adding stripes. 00:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 02:38, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks the taddest bit blotchy by where the haunch meets the foreleg. 03:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

You may not be changing any colors, but that ear pink needs to be blurred. Misty, this looks much better then the original version. 08:03, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading along his back. 93.97.191.4 18:27, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Derp. Forgot to log-in. 18:29, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W)- Redone
Redone. there was multiple issues, Permission from Scarlet. Looked funny when I tried to tweak. Please don't kill me. Oa is Bramble.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 02:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. <3 Define the shading on the tail a little. I'm jealous. 03:36, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add some shading in the midriff area, so the shading isn't just a straight line? Puurdy :D 21:19, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No. No purdy, or jealousness. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 01:20, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (W) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be redone, and I accidently erased the earpink so I had to do that along with the shading.. Sorry. Dx OA was Icecloud33. Oh, and according to the new rule do I have to do her kit image along with this one? M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:20, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the shoulder highlight more circular. 21:12, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And lighten the earpink a tad. 21:18, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And no, you don't have to do her kit if you just tweaked the shading on this one. It's only if it's a major change. You're more than welcome to reserve it, though. 03:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (W) - Redone
Iceheart's was declined, so I think I'm fine to put this up. OA was Night shine. And her stripes were unnatural and she needed to be brown. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:39, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

You never fail to please. Darken the shading near the base of the tail just a tad. 02:49, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

She should probably stay short haired. I know you're going to be redoing all of the images, but it feels to me like we have an abundance of long haired characters. 02:52, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beechstar (L) - Tweaked
I just burned it to make it darker and tweaked the eyes 'cause they didn't make sense to me XD <span style="">03:16 Sat Nov 19

OA was Echomist <span style="">03:17 Sat Nov 19

Wow, that was fast :D Perhaps just a little darker? 03:18, November 19, 2011 (UTC)