Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Sagewhisker(MC) - Redone
I fail ;.; Most recent OA's were Silver and Dazzy. I added a graying muzzle. Comments? 15:44, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge it than blur it a bit? That way it'll look like it's actually graying instead of a gray muzzle. 12:50, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:53, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten her a little? She's a little dark to be white. 02:18, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I just ran the dodge tool over it. x3 20:36, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? 01:53, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:29, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

It still doesn't look white...and the shading's a bit off... Honestly, I think it should just be redone. I've been meaning to ask that for a while now....x.x

I'm withdrawing this. x3 21:37, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? I still have the .pxd and I can redo it. (That is if you decide nominating this first. Besides I'd like to fix the mistake of making her look gray and not white x3.) 22:21, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

I see no problems with that. Go ahead, Silver.

Reuploaded I redid the shading. I used the regular mc shading because I can never get the regular shading right. Also I only lightened it a smidge, because as you can tell it's light enough. x3 22:41, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading. /

Lighten up the muzzle a bit? I just think it'd come in gradually rather than a solid dark block of grey. 00:34, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing. 22:46, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a little more.

She needs blue eyes. 04:37, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 11:04, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Shading still needs more blurring. o3o 11:17 Mon Oct 29

Reuploaded Redid the shading again. 23:11, October 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:34, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:15, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the tail shading match the light source. If her muzzle was graying, that's from age, and that'd mean it's losing it's color. It shouldn't be darker.... should it? I don't think that's possible. But then, I've never heard of a white cat with a graying muzzle at all, so... 18:53, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the muzzle a lot. Also, I didn't change the tail shading because I think it looks fine... o3o 23:17, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading, please.

I dunno if this is gonna make sense, but the tail's texture should be going upwards. That's the way tail fur grows. owo 05:38 Fri Nov 2

Mothwing (MC) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for shading. 05:16, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten it just a tad? 23:45, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

&apos;&apos;&apos;Re-uploaded&apos;&apos; this and the warrior image. 15:54, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the depth in the shading? (same goes for the warrior, but I'm lazy)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA is Shelly. It needed to be darker. I actually /have/ the file for this, so if there&apos;s anything else that needs to be tweaked, I can take care of it now.

It seems just a tad dark. Lighten it up a smidge? 11:37, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Jayfeather (Alt MCA) ~ Tweaked
OA is Iceheart, and he needed a stubby tail. ...does someone want to tell me /why/ this is longhaired and not shorthaired like the rest of his images? o.O

Shouldn&apos;t it be changed to shorthair then? o3o 01:11, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I&apos;d think so. Anyone have any problems with me doing that?

Not really, but wasn&apos;t he thought to have been confused with Hollyleaf who is a longhair? 04:25, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Is there any proof that he was confused? Otherwise it&apos;s an assumption. 10:50, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

I read that part in Outcast. It's clearly Jaypaw they're talking about. So, I'm just going to go ahead and change the blank.

Lilystem (Q) - Tweaked
Last OA was Cinder. Just darkened it to match warrior. &lt;small&gt;&lt;small&gt;I think I made it a bit too dark....&lt;/small&gt;&lt;/small&gt; 01:28, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, please. x3 02:45, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:25, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? 14:48, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's missing colour from her front paw. Like, one or two pixels. 23:20, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:19, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart (W) - Tweaked
Last OA was Ivy. Tweaked the shading 01:28, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 23:18, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:19, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Troutclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone cause of reasons. OA was a sheep. 02:42, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Featherstorm (E) ~ Tweaked
Erm, tweaked the stripes. 23:54, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots(W) - Redone
None of the images matched. OA was Stoney. I based it off of this image, so I'm pretty sure it's natural. Comments? 01:00, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a bit and maybe add some more? 01:20, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

give em' a smudge too; they look a bit paintbrushed on 04:22, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think they need to be smudged. That's not what makes them look paintbrushy. Just point the tips more, kind of like on the elder image, rather than having them so round and you should be fine. Also define the shading, especially on the shoulder. Nice job Ducksauce ouo I swear I will never typo that again   06:48, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) ~ Redone
Duck and I got permission to redo them all. OA was Mousetalon and Stoney. Comments? 01:28, 02, 11, 2012