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Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Cloudy sent me the file and I redid the shading. Comments? 21:43, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

I know it's optional, but could you darken it? He looks a touch flat. 01:51, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. 03:54 Thu Jan 3

Re-uploaded Gray cats' shading. e.e  03:01, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC) - Redone
fffff I dun like this. Redone for a lot of reasons. Last OA was Iceheart. Comments? 04:24, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the bottom of the ear-pink a touch and, it might be because of the shading, but define the tabby stripes on the tail 21:46, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

It's supposed to be furry there, it doesn't need to be defined. And yeah it is the shading on the tail, so I'm not sure what you want me to do. Without the shading they're underblurred and really dark as is. 22:42, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe lessen the shading just a touch becuase all I see is an almost black tail with some spots of dark orange 22:44, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Since this is supposed to match her description, the tail needs to have gold instead of orange on it, and either her face needs to look more mottled or her body more dappled, because right now they look the same. 23:55, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Building on what Breezey said, the gold should be worked back into the design. She's described with a gold-and-black striped tail, and so she obviously has gold in her pattern. 02:11, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Actually there is gold worked in and on her tail, but I'll make it more visibly gold. :b And Scar, the tail shading's already really thin as is.... 05:07, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Kay lightened and brightened the gold a bit, and tried to erase some spots on the brown and orange to make more of the gold flecks visible. If I make this any more golden, it looks green next to the other colors, so if you want a color change please leave and example color. 05:13, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded tweaked a couple things as per request of Shelly. Dappled torties suck >:C 05:35, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Weedwhisker (E) ~ Redone
Redone for multiple stuff. (paleh let me so no killee??) 05:56, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste around the face. This is so pretty?? 16:11, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nu, it looks like he's been snowed on. 21:53, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Can you blur the white some? 01:46, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:54, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt. A) - Tweaked
Redid the shading cuz it was weird. OA was moi 22:03, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading pwease? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:29, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:23, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) - Redone
The kit's coming up in a bit. So here. OA was me, and it was redone to look more natural. 02:42, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad, and  if that's a pale belly, can you blur and define it? 02:49, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Saturate the brown; I thought he was a black tabby at first. 03:06, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Dumb me forgot to save the xcf, so I redid him completely. 02:41, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten and saturate it more, still doesn't look like a brown tabby. 19:04, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (W) ~ Redone
Redone to resemble Spottedleaf x.x Comments? 03:51, 04, 01, 2013

Lovey, why you be so epical? Just a preference, maybe make the ear-pink paler to help with visibility, otherwise, I really don't see anything wrong 05:34, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you my love <33 06:03, 04, 01, 2013

Swiftpaw (A) - Tweaked
Blegh... I fail... Tweaked the shading so the white wouldn't look so gray. OA be moi 05:41, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) - Redone
Redone because he needed to be mottled. I hope he's ginger enough (and mottled enough). Comments? 06:06, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Still partially knocked out from epicness Holy crud, Breezy. That's insane! But I'd make it a bit more ginger, right now, he looks kinda brown and sandy-rosish color 06:08, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. He is partly brown. Thank you. <3  06:18, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Just a taaaaaaad more ginger? Kinda tawnyish right now. 06:51, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:22, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe make the tear smaller? 23:06, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:37, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to resemble Spottedleaf. These blanks hate me ;.; Comments? 06:52, 04, 01, 2013

Hazeltail (A) ~ Declined
Shading and patches of gray needed fixing. OA was Ivyheart. Comments? o3o 21:26, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

The white looks gray. Perhaps add highlights or something?

Umm, Paleh had this reserved. x3 21:29, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Paleh's reservation ran out, I believe. But correct me if I'm wrong. And if I am, I'm sorry and I'll take this down. >.<  21:47, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

No it didn't run out. I still had one or two days, and was actually intending to post it today. Declined. 18:57, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Running Horse (E) - Tweaked
Most recent OA is me. Ahh my first ever tweak, it was a nice first try, but meh. I totally removed the original fur patches, and made a new layer for the fur. I looked at actual picture of cats losing their fur and tried to mimic it all over his body. I'm contemplating making longer fur around his spine, because in a few of them, the fur on the spine was usually the last to fall out. I also tweaked the earpink and blended the shading a bit more. I'm not entirely sure about his skin color, I really don't think it's right, but that's up to you guys. 01:44, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Percy (R) - Tweaked
Tis Hickory <3 I'm the OA. Needed rumpled fur. I'm contemplating lightening the shading a smidge but I'm not going to unless I get the ok since it wasn't nominated for that. I was also thinking about giving him fenderskirts (more fur on the belly) but I don't know. 01:53, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Runningstorm (Ki) - Redone
Redone to be more natural. OA was me with a tweak by Dazzle. 02:53, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

For some reason the file isn't in the history, nor will it overwrite o.o 03:24, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

-pokes comment on warrior- That applies here too, and also define the shading. 19:04, January 5, 2013 (UTC)