Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Snowfur (A) - Tweaked
oa is snowdazzle with tweaks from duck and splook. expanded the highlights. comments? 23:40, 07/22/2014

yo so anyway i did have this on the table before i posted this it just wouldn't publish??? i hit publish on this page after i did on the main charart page but idk my internet is weird bruh but yah that's what happened 23:50, 07/22/2014

Shouldnt the eyes be blue? That looks like green. and her other chararts have blue eyes. It might just be my screen, though.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:19, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

They are blue. I never touched the eyes. 00:39, 07/23/2014

Could you darken the shading just a tiny bit? I can hardly see it. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:07, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on..?

Maybe a tint would help? 18:59 Sun Jul 27

reuploaded also I can't tint on top of a layer of grey shading- I tried and it looks horrid. 22:17, 07/27/2014

Try lighting the shading. 23:58, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Antpelt (Ro) ~ Tweaked
OA was Berry, tweaked for scarred back. I've not done scars before, and therefore had to guess how, so please excuse the ugliness. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  11:38, July 25, 2014 (UTC)

makes his back scars' color match the neck scars 17:52, July 25, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I colorpicked again, and then messed with the hue and saturation to try and get it right. Best I can do. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:15, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste on the back and under the tail. Also, is his other ear supposed to look black? Brick 12:48, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

dude look at his description. anyway can you like make the tips of the scars slightly sharper to match or something 12:55, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Scars are hard o_o And yes, Brick. Antpelt is described with one black ear. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:57, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone for multiple issues. Oa's are Bramble, then tweaked by Sandstar, then tweaked again by Snowed of Lightning, and then later redone by Scarlet. 17:26 Sat Jul 26

Umm, correct me if I'm wrong, but I think this is the male blank. Other than that, I don't see anything wrong. 01:13, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ahh way to pay attention Hawky. >:C 16:15 Sun Jul 27

Blur the shading just a little bit.

Re-uploaded. Don't know if that did much. 17:28 Sun Jul 27

Fallen Leaves (SP) - Tweaked
Ah, there we go. I like this version much more- basically I smudged and smoothed out the shading and the OA is me.

IDK if it's just me being a derp but I'm naving a hard time seeing the shading. I can see it on <-- ear and one paw a little but nowhere else. feel free to ignore me you obviously know what your doing 18:58 Sun Jul 27

Re-uploaded. I darkened it ouo

Okay I can see it much better now. c; 19:02 Sun Jul 27

You could probably get away with darkening it a bit more. 04:28, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Mistystar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
My first approved image! OA was me, and she was tweaked for flat and hard-to-see shading. Look here if changes arn't showing. 18:34, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Why is there pale markings on her? She wasn't described with those? 18:48, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Are they highlights? 18:56 Sun Jul 27

Reuploaded. Yes, they were highlights. I didn't like how they came out, though, so I just removed them. Look here if changes aren't showing. 18:59, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reuploaded. Look here if changes aren't showing. 19:21, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. Given the source you're using, which is the most common one (pretty sure of it), there would be at least some light on the legs, and it looks to be all in shading.

Front, back, or both? 19:27, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Mainly the front legs, but putting some light on all of them wouldn't hurt.

Reuploaded. It's about as defined as it will get. Look here if changes aren't showing. 19:41, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'm still seeing some paler parts on her front 21:56, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine. It's how I defined the light on the legs. 22:08, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

it's not on the legs though, it's on her chest 22:21, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

I don't know where it's coming from; I didn't do anything there. 22:23, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and see what happens, then.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing. 22:36, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Bouncefire(Alt W) - Tweaked
OA's were Iceheart and Beebs. Tweaked for Flat shading. 21:53, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a bit and I fixed the heading for you.

re-uploaded why did I put that? 21:58, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading please? 23:57, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, it's not overly dark and I can see the stripes under it perfectly clear. 03:32, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Owlstar (Star) ~ Tweaked
i also tweaked his eyes just to look slightly better as well as the shading. 04:31, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Jayfeather (A) - Tweaked
Tweaked for shading; last Oa was Ivy. Comments? — 09:45 Mon Jul 28

Lighten the shading a bit. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:59, July 28, 2014 (UTC)