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Stormkit (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Ok, I know I put 2 images on, but I couldn't decide if she was mostly gray or mostly ginger, so I put them both on, and I'll let you decide which one's better. Comments?Bluestar11796 00:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

First, don't make this a gallery, and don't make it a thumbnail either. Whichever one you choose, which I think the first is better, blur the patches, and define the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:11, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, but when I tried to put them on separately, the first image disapeared, that's the only reason I put them in the gallery. But, it's fixed.Bluestar11796 23:40, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I say go with the second one, but make the gray lighter, since in the graphic novel it appears to be a very light, almost white, gray. 23:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you need to change it to the proper eye color. Her eyes are amber, not brown. 23:45, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

There, fixed it for you x) Tone down the ginger, looks too bright :\ and blend/smudge the grey and ginger together. -- 23:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you're going with the second one - The lineart looks a little blurry, though it may change. Blur/smudge the patches and blur the stripes. Also, redden the earpink some and define the shading :3

If you're going with the first one - Blur the stripes, smudge the patches, redden the earpink and define shading/highlights. 23:48, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Who is working on this, no one signed. If you go with the first one, make the gray look less...weird, maybe make her paler ginger, and paler gray? and tone tone the gray down? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me, i forget that quite often.Bluestar11796 00:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I had always thought of her as more of a Sandstorm color. 01:04, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Not to be mean, but I don't think this is how she was depicted in the book. Let my check my copy of TR and see which one she is again 02:02, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

go to google images and look at a picture of a ginger and gray cat, they mostly have a sandstorm color of ginger. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

U mean leik this? -- 02:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded (or more like re-done). I made the ginger more like on Sandstorm's charart, and I really like the first one, but, its up to you.Bluestar11796 03:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, now make the gray a bit lighter and the ginger part a bit more ginger (they look tan now :\) -- 03:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and go with the second one. The first one is awesome but it's not how she was depicted in the book 14:51, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be blurred on the ginger patches. 16:10, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I decided: Gray with ginger patches (even though I think that the mostly ginger one is cool), so,''' Re-uploaded. Bluestar11796 16:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading is too dark. Please fix it. I love the patches, btw. Good job! 16:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the stripes on the paws, it looks to unreal. other than that, great job^^ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger patches larger on the body, add shading on the tail, make the earpink redder, blur the stripes, along with the shading. Nice work 17:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights, and define the earpink. `

Reuploaded. changes not showing.Bluestar11796 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 21:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur lighting, I see circles there. Leaf-storm,7:35,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Instead of completely getting rid of the paw stripes, I say you make them horizontal instead of vertical. But that's just me. 14:26, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gray and ginger.... huh, is that ever possible? XD Anyways, this looks GREAT, but the shading seems a bit funky, like it's got two different shadings, one for the gray, and one for the ginger, it doesn't look all the same, if that made any sense. XD It's like, it's shaded in different places on the ginger than on the gray. Any way of fixing that? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:06, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:52, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

@Paleclaw, Well, it HAS to be otherwise, she wouldn't be Gray and ginger, nor my cat's kit, Spots xD This looks great, blur the highliths a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:59, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should make it look like a dilute tortoiseshell, which is like a cream or pale ginger and gray. It makes more sense if you ask me. xP 20:18, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I know you're not supposed to use the cover images but on that one it has a lighter gray, maybe that would make it look more natural Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  00:16, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

That's not really what a dilute tortie looks like. Basically they are a gray tabby with light patches of cream. Right now the ginger is too bright. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 06:36, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is a tad off-topic, but maybe she's a torbie (tabby-tortie mix), that could be possible. 13:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be a bit more solid looking. 21:40, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been uploaded for a week. Are you still working on this? 22:28, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm still working on it, but I started high school almost a week ago, so I can't work on it much. I'm at school right now!Bluestar11796 16:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but try to work as much as you can, or else this might get withdrawn for lack of work. 22:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 01:10, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it as well. 01:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This should be declined, as the picture hasn't been updated in over a week. Nothing against the user, but I do believe those are the rules. 04:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, they are. I think someone can take over now, or this will be archived. 23:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

A lead needs to decline this, I would change the heading but I do not believed that I am allowed. 14:44, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Um...could I take over? I would love to! 20:06, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, if you're not doing Tigerheart anymore 20:28, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

^^ Thankies I'll get working on it ASAP I'm probally gonna redo most of it.... 23:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded bleh meh no like this. But comments? 00:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gray and ginger meet. 00:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluredafyed? 00:18, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a gray nose 00:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Never knew that....

Tone down the earpink, blur it, and smudge the ginger into the gray more. Yo, Sandstorm, mind if I ask you a question? -- 01:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I can only be one for a minute so shoot. What's your question? 01:45, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger; and darken the shading. 04:21, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's on the second file page. Thanks for all of the comments :3 15:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ginger patches; they look a bit too golden. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 20:41, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Wow it does look better now I really like this

Darken the shading. 00:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches in the direction of the fur, to give it some sort of texture. 01:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bleh tryed my best with the smudging but, bleh 12:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink; it looks blotchy. Also, darken the shading. 00:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it look more like the Stormkit from After The Flood's manga pic. (i really do love stormkit) So make the stripes in the place like the manga and lighten the gray so it's sort of like a pale gray because in the manga it's shown to be an extremly light gray. 11:35, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I havn't done it in a while school started >_< But I will still be able to work on this ^^ 21:06, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the patches and the stripes more. 22:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah i looked at my manga book and noticed that it has part of the tail tabby so....I did that :P 01:21, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the gray parts. This is cool, I like it SpottedtalonMudears 03:42, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thankies ^^ But I really do hope this will get approved I think it's turning out good so far! 22:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, redden the earpink. Most common comments ever. xD 00:03, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But it's good! For me at least xD 19:50, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches and stripes a bit more. I really like this! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah thanks and I can't blur no more than this :P 14:30, September 11, 2011 (UTC) well the patches still need to be blurred some more. 20:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Just to clarify, we don't mean that the stripes in the patches need blurring, but that the patches need to be blurred into the gray. Once that is done, I'll consider it perfect. 21:52, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Like smudging the patches intop the gray? I'm confuised.... 23:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

If she meant smudging or not, I think it would look really good with smudges, so I think you should do so. 01:16, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes smudge into the gray. For example, look down at the Mapleshade at the bottom of this page. All of her patches are smudged together. Try that, but on a smaller scale. Just blend the patches gently into the gray at the edges so they look soft, not sharp. 01:28, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I hope its better now..... 12:44, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, make the patches reddish so it looks like the manga and get rid of the stripes on the patches so it matches. (im very strict on that cuz i <3 stormkit) 13:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

All ginger cats have stripes. That's the rule in this wiki and in life. That the artist of the graphic novel doesn't know much about cat genetics isn't our problem. And I personally think the color is fine, but do what you want. 17:14, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Had a few oppinions and Imma keep it like this. and I do agree with you Shellheart ^^ 20:52, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ginger meets the white and I think this'll be ready. 16:38, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Not trying to disagree or anything but I REALLY think that the patches should be redder. (please dont yell at me *cowers in fear* 19:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The ginger is fine as it is :). Thicken the shading. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:21, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur it a tad. We don't copy the exact styles seen in the manga. Not sure why though. 21:24, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I blured and darkened the shading. But blur what white? That doesn't make sense... 23:06, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I meant ginger and gray, sorry. I am so scatterbrained... >.>;; 23:10, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I did that and smudged it ever so slightly.... 00:03, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading.

Reuploaded Dones I luv this ^^ 00:28, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? This is an amazing image, by the way. 15:37, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Sandstorm, but could you make the earpink a lot smaller, and make the stripes on the side stretch all the way to the lineart? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wait, is the CBA still going on? Or what? 14:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Not while you still had things to do. Once someone comments on a CBA, they need to change the heading back to For Approval, nulling the CBA. But, a lead can reinstate the CBA, which is what I will do now. CBA? 14:58, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you darken the shading a tad? 01:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded CBA still on? 01:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

No, CBA's stop when someone commetns, and whether the image is ready or not after it's reuploaded, you still have to wait for someone to repeat the CBA. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:31, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

repeating CBA. 00:18, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart between the front leg and back leg, and some other places, and there's some miss coloured lineart on the front leg thats farther back. I'd just paste a new line art over the current one and remove the blurred part. 00:33, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. Looks nice ;D Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:54, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah 1. Thank you for all of the comments and you too Sacrletwind for CBAing it. But I won't be able to work on this untill Monday, maybe Sunday. But I'll get to it soon.

Reuploaded yeah the one above was me xD and also bleh tryed my best DX 23:09, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Let's try this again. CBA? 00:14, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh...I'm so sorry but the shading needs to be blurred. 20:11, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore! I even tryed on Gimp! 22:48, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded So Icestorm helped me out. Comments? 01:51, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose a slightly darker gray than her pelt. (if this is the right version) 02:10, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah it is it was pink before :P 12:24, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) For Approval
Here's Rainflower. Any suggestions? 19:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It appears you didn't use the correctly sized base, and this should have been put below Blackstar. You're going to have to redo this in the right sized base. 19:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC) This is good but yesh, I'm afraid you will have to redo this. ;) Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  19:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''sorry but what is the right sized base? 19:44, August 22, 2011 (UTC)'''

http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Warriorlongf.gif 19:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

oh sorry i see it now. thanx 19:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploded wiith the right base I don't think the changes are showing yet. Comments? 20:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The changes showed up comments? 21:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is white. Make her a light gray, or just take the colors from the queen image I have up for approval. Also, rename this Rainflower.warrior.png şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  21:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is smudged all around, define the black in the eye, thicken and darken the shading, and define the highlight on the tail. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 21:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

You should give her a pupil, for starters... 23:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

ok and snow it is light gray. it isn't white!? 23:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I dont know if the changes show but now she's as close to the color on her queen image as i can get. i think her lineart is not as smudged, i put a pupil but i don't know if it shows. Also how to i rename her? Comments? 00:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Much better Lion! Um, I still don't see a pupil in the eye. If you go to Firepelt's tutorial, you should be able to find the eye design. Also, the earpink looks a bit odd, make it a more natural color. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:21, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better! (holy cow I didn't know Shadewing was gonna say that...) Blur the highlights on her shoulder and haunch 00:23, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok. i'll try. ummmmmm how do i rename her. 13:17, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reupload it, but before you do, there will be a box with a "more options", choose this and you can rename the old file. I will mark the wrong file for deletion so it can be deleted and yours will have the right name 13:27, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok thank you 18:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

when i try to reupload it, it just goes back to a blank reupload page. can someone tell me why it's doing this ? And i don't think i can change the name. I couldn't find the button. sorry 18:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'll rename it. 21:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Renamed. The changes might not be showing yet, so give it some time. 21:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

thank you! 00:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

ok 13:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and also blur the earpink. :p 15:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded i dont know if the changes show. 21:29, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and the earpink. Maybe perhaps you should redden the earpink a bit 22:42, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

i reuploaded it so it may not show the changes but i'll do it again and i tried reder earpink but it just looks wierd. 22:53, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Its too light. Take the color from her queen image. 23:27, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did mistystar 13:53, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Then why is it too light? 15:36, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

i don't know maybe i did it wrong. i'll try to make it a little darker. 20:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

The color is better now, but the shading should blend into the pelt more. Try either making the highlights bigger, or blurring it a lot. 23:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know if it looks any better 23:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Um, there are white pixels surrounding the eye. Also, the eye still needs a pupil and all. 14:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

i did put a pupil and i don't know about the white pixles let me fix that. 16:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. fixed the white pixles and there has been a pupil. 16:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, fix the eye (Look at Nightshine's tutorial on how to do eyes), and smoothen the pelt. 22:59, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

What exactly do you mean by smoothen the pelt? 23:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Fixed the eye and earpink but i don't know what smoothen the pelt means sorry. 00:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, nice job Lion! Blur ze chest highlights. xD. 21:03, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

As Shadewing said, blur the tail highlight. But the other two are really sloppy, no offense, and blurring would make them inconsistent. Make them like the tail and face highlights. Also, she's pale gray, not white. Add shading or darken it. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 22:02, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

there i shading. i think and none taken. i'll try anyway. 23:16, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think it looks any better. 23:22, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights stick out, and the earpink is too pink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 23:53, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

She looks white right now, darken the whole thing a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I Don't think the changes are showing.

She still looks white. Try to make her pelt colour darker. Stoneclaw33 09:37, August 28, 2011

I made her darker i think the changes will show up in a while. 17:11, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think the changes are showing. I made her darker. 19:15, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can I make the picture from another time become the picture that shows up on this page? Because i upload it but it just goes back to the original picture. Can someone help me?? 19:23, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Calm down. The changes just aren't showing. Give it some time, and they'll show up. We just have too many images on this wiki.... 00:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shade of gray; it looks like she's a white cat. Darken the ear-pink as well. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:06, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

ok thank you. 19:12, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I fixed her. She is darker, Fixed earpink and highlights. Changes aren't showing yet. 13:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty good. She looks much better now.I think the shading on her back needs to blurred a little more Stoneclaw33 12:42 August 30 2011

ok. 20:26, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think the changes are showing. 21:22, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink; it looks too neon. 00:48, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Changes aren't showing though. 17:24, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job for your first charart Cind! ^-^ 20:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. awwwww thanx snowy. 21:36, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 23:41, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it looks better though. 00:09, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

highlightes are odd have you looked at a tutorial? That could help. And the ear pink is too bright and blur it. 17:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. changes aren't showing yet. 21:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink not so hot-pink and brighten the eyes a bit. Also, maybe darken the main fur color just a bit more? Still looks white to me. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Changes aren't showing. 22:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink just a tad more. 01:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'changes aren't showing yet. 20:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

So is this image approved? 00:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, it was never CBAed, this looks lovely, Only thing, darken the ear-pink, it looks to neon.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:40, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ummmm what's CBA? Sorry i'm new. I'll try. thanx. 00:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and the shading, please. 04:19, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

earpink look way too neon..and define the shading & add some shading to the right ear x) -- 04:30, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ok and what is CBAed? Thanx 12:44, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The head is way too white, and the shading is blotchy. I suggest you re-do the shading and pick a different lighter and more natural color for the earpink. 14:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

CBA=Comments Before Approval. Take the ear-pink from Sunfish's warrior image, or Ferncloud's warrior image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ok just gimme some time. 02:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

sorry guys my computer is having some problems they'll get fixed in about maybe 24 hrs. I'm sorry once it starts working i'll work on the image, wait it won't get declined because of this will it? 18:59, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, unless you're gone for over a week, this will be fine. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

When you come back, lighten the ear-pink, make it smaller, and blur it. Darken the shading and define the light source. 03:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

great! and thanx guys. 17:22, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I think this one is the best so far ^^ 23:51, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, make it look smooth. 06:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. ' 23:34, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shade the feet farthest from us. 02:49, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, blur the highlights, add/brighten the face highlight, and the earpink is too pink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:19, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights. 00:09, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink slightly. --  Fr  os  t  e  d  A  p  p  l  e   01:47, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think you've covered a black pixel or two with the eye color. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:07, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'Reuploaded. '@ shadewing u were right but i fixed it thanx for catching me! 20:27, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

the highlights and ear pink are both too bright. And please don't use chat speak ;) 21:47, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'and sorry. 14:22, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still a little bright. Dull it down to a soft pink. 19:35, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. ' 23:17, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the highlights on the haunch and shoulder, lighten the shading/darken the highlights on her tail and blur them together, and her head is way lighter than her body.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 23:50, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are too layered, smooth them out by blurring. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫  19:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

'reuploaded. ' 23:37, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, and darken them. Looking good~ Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:57, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image looks a little blotchy. {+{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Stoneclaw33/Sig}+} 09:41, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still looks a bit purple. Make it a tad pinker :3 21:35, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. ' 18:05, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, they are somewhat concentrated. Fr os  t  e  d  A  p  p  l  e   04:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. ' 18:09, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and darken the pelt color just the slightest bit. And the ear pink is purple O.o 21:33, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. ' 23:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

I found some things that needed to be fixed so 'Reuploaded. '<font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Violet <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">pelt <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (Q) - For Approval
It's my first in a while. On her page it didn't have an eye color so I chose a random one. Hope it looks good! Comments? Moon 20:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Darken the shading on the back. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  20:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tabby stripes on her face, make the earpink bigger, and to be honest, the eye color blend in with the pelt, but that's just a personal preference. 21:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The eye color looks fine to me Ivystripe. Redden the earpink and darken the shading on the white. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

You need to maek her long-haired, it says all Riverclan cats have thick fur. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have too, not all the RiverClan cats are long-haired (Reedwhisker and Graymist as examples. Define/darken the nose color. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

We are going to tweak them later, we are thinking to make all Riverclan cats long-furred. Scroll down ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I didn't see that. My whole mind's a blur today... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! I think there's some shading waste or something around her tail. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:33, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make it a longhair, and define the earpink. 17:43, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I will get to this as soon as I can, sorry started school and I am really busy with soccer and school. If I have to do it completely over I will try and get it by tomorrow. Thanks. Moo  nstr   ike  04:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. 22:45, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 23:34, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is a thin line sticking out of the tabby patch on the tail tip. 03:13, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Moon! *tacklehug* I've missed you. Darken the shading on the white, but overall beautiful! 23:24, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wait should I redo it or what? Make it long haired or what? I am confused... Some people say it looks good this way others say to redo it. Moo  nstr   ike  02:54, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, all RiverClan cats are being done as long hairs unless specified as otherwise. Sorry, you'll have to redo it. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:02, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Um, enlarge the earpink. 13:56, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I see that Moonpelt Isn't doing anything with it Leaf-storm,19:53,August 29,2011 (UTC)

Give her time, it's only been a day. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it and define the earpink. 00:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a lot more than a few days, it was last updated August 22. 17:14, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

It had been three days. Give her time. 17:23, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I was looking on the upload page. Sorry. 17:24, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, you don't have to re-do it. For my Skyheart image, I simply put the longhaired image as a layer over mine, and erased all of the lineart of the shorthair. The tail will be re-done, though. This can be frustrating, so you don't have to use this method. I think I remember Ivystripe explaining this, so you could ask her for details. 20:08, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over this cat ..I already made longhaired version..If you allow it.. Leaf-storm,15:09,September 3,2011 (UTC)

Go ahead & take over, it hasnt been updated in over a week.. >_> -- 15:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can I? Thanks! Ok, first I reupload it as longhaired..it needs some changes, say what do you think? Leaf-storm,16:22,September 3,2011 (UTC)

Oh, It's not showing! Leaf-storm,16:23,September 3,2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry... I've been very busy. Moo  nstr   ike  20:54, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Moonstrike, but Leafstrom already took over, if you take a image, you need to work on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:27, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and rename it Softwing.queen.png. 04:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Difine the earpink and make it more red.Moonstorm88 10:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Renamed only..I do other things later. Leaf-storm,12:33,September 5,2011 (UTC)

Oh, at last I'm home..Ok I reuploaded it now, I don't know if changes are showing Leaf-storm,16:58,September 5,2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. 18:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I made new stripes and add some more shadings..Leaf-storm,18:25,September 7,2011 (UTC)

I bow down to your stripes. blur them sliiightly & define the shading -- 22:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded .Leaf-storm,18:35,September 8,2011 (UTC)

This is beautfiul :3 Except I feel that patches's coloring should be more on the brown side. You don't have to change it unless others agree. 21:44, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, blur the shaidng. I agree with Silvereye. 00:14, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,9:06,September 10,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white. It's really blotchy. 02:08, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,10:37,September 11,2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes more tabbier. I don't know if that helps much. 07:05, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:37,September 13,2011 (UTC)

There might be some blurred lineart by the haunch, but I'm not sure. Define the shading a tad, please :3 00:15, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, and make the earpink more triangular. 00:16, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Again, me being picky XP Ok, make all the patches color match, define the ear pink, as said from mistystar's comment and this is turning out very pretty! 12:14, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,12:55,September 14,2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! But the one small patch on the chest looks lighter. Can you fix that? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 13:00, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Hmmm, I think I'm blind xD I made something with it, is it right now? Leaf-storm,14:16,September 14,2011 (UTC)

Perfect. :3 Shadewing  Blades of the Night  19:34, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading on the white a bit more and then I'll CBA this. 00:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok ,something like this? Leaf-storm,13:30,September 15,2011 (UTC)

It's fourth day without comment Leaf-storm,13:57,September 19,2011 (UTC)

The shading looks kind of blotchy to me. You need to have smooth transition between light and dark. Also, in some of your darkesst places, t doesn't touch the lineart and leaves it white. Make it the same color. 15:28, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

reupload, anything changed?? Leaf-storm,16:50,September 19,2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Q) - For Approval
I added her yesterday, but somehow she was deleted. :P Anyway I know it sucks! <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. It doesn't match her other chararts, so get the colors off of them. 18:04, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also, isn't this more than the page limit? 18:09, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, and she needs a gray nose. 18:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is over the limit of 35. 19:12, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's not now, and the others should have been archived. 20:25, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

blur the stripes more -- 00:06, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and enlarge it a bit more. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:49, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing though.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:46, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I redid her stripes, blured the shading, and changed her colors to match her other chararts. I can see some white dots, but I colored those in, hang on I'm still editing her.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay fixed the white dots, but the changes arn't showing :P<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Now the changes are showing. Yay! I also blurred the ear-pink a little more. Hope it gets approved soon!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, blur the earpink more, and lighten the highlights. 20:56, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might not show.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the stripes and the earpink and the shading. You should redden the earpink too. 22:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

And it needs to match her other chararts. It has too many stripes. 23:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might show. I'm not sure. It looks like they are not showing. I removed some stripes, and blurred everything.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 03:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are not showing!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 15:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay changes are showing, a little.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 15:23, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more. 22:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I added a gray nose, blurred the stripes, and removed some black smudge around her tail.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:46, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Willowbreeze.queen.png, and remove a few more stripes. 23:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try, but there are other willobreeze.queen images.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 01:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Then overwrite the images :] 15:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But the previous image always shows up, but I'll try!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:27, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I canged the name to Willowbreeze.queen.png, and removed a little more stripes. Hope it gets approved!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur ze highlights, especially tail and haunch. 21:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She looks a little dark compared to her Warrior image. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 00:30, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Her warrior image was not apporved yet. I copied her colors from her kit, and apprentice pics.Also, I won't be on start after this, not until tommorrow.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 02:06, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, there's a white pixel on the front right (our right) paw. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 12:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes aren't showing. :P I fixed the white on the paw.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:33, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more and round it; it looks a bit flat. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:00, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading a bit more, and blured it. Hope it gets approved!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't everyone? xD Lighten the highlights a bit, and blur them. 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing now.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:29, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back highlight a lot. 23:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur the highliht on her belly and left front leg, blur the earpink a bit. This looks friggin awesome by the way 8D -- 01:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thank you! I blured the earpink, and the highlights.Also, I darkened the shading, just tell me to lighten it if it's too dark.:D PS. The changes might not show. :P<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, blur the front left leg and belly highlight more, make it look smooth like the tail & haunch x3 -- 22:33, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the changes are now showing! I'm gonna re-upload it now.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 00:44, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes arn't showing. But i smudged the highlights.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 01:01, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

heheh, your gonna hate meh for saying this but blurr/smudge them some more xD Oh, and darken the very bottom of her belly and chest shading -- 03:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes are still not showing! It looks way better than this.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 04:57, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 04:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur / smudge the stripes into the pelt and make the whole thing lighter.Moonstorm88 10:19, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make what lighter? Her pelt colors?<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 16:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moonstorm, sorry but the stripes should not be smudged into the pelt, because it won't match the other images. 00:07, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes are not showing!!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 13:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now the changes are showing. So, should I smudge in the stripes? Or leave them? :| <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is coming along nicely! Also, do not darken the whole thing like moonstorm said. It's supposed to match the others x) Anyways, blur the front legs and back highlights(heheh..) and did you add the darker shading to the very bottom of the stomach & chest liek I told you to? I dont see any .-. -- 21:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:02, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing. I lightened the shading a bit, and added the darker shading like Blue said, (hehe) and blurred the highlights a little. Though, I won't be on during this weekend, :P so yea, I might be on, or not.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 03:13, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her stomache needs to be blurred a lot. This is looking great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But somehow the changes are still not showing! Just wait till' the changes show.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 16:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

She was mentioned to have the same forehead markings as Silverstream in CP. I think the charart should reflect that. Otherwise, beautiful. 20:39, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the front paw and back.` 22:59, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the shading just a teensy bit. 17:19, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Okay the changes ar not showing. I kept her forehead marking the same 'cause I based it on her kit image and apprentice.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 00:09, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The kit and apprentice chararts can be tweaked, but it was specifically stated that Willowbreeze and Silverstream have identical forehead markings. I honestly think it should be done. In any case, realistically, all cats have the tabby M. 00:37, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly's right. Honestly, it's a simple tweak for the other images. Moon, if you could do that, we'd appreciate it. =) 00:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes are showing! Kk, XD I removed the stripe and added the "M" on her.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:40, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading a lot. 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is really pretty ^^. Blur the stripes a tad more. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:58, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thank you! I blurred the shading and the stripes. But the changes aren't showing. :P <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 18:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Any more tips?<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:02, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading into the pelt and define the earpink. 15:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I defined the earpink and blurred the shading.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:13, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade(Lo) ~For Approval


So here she is....People did this vefore, so I don't see why I cant, Once Fleck is withdrawn, this will be number 35. I took all colors from her Warrior image, this ish my first image....so comments? 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

NICE x) blurr the earpnik, smudge where the white meets the brown, and define the stripes -- 00:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She looks miscolored, take the colors from her warrior image. 00:09, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I did, sweetie, it is just I shade and highlight differ than Mosspool. I use Pixrl, I think she uses Gimp, thats all ;)

Anyway; Reuploaded. Thank you, Blueorca^^ changes aren't showing. (I think I need to blur the stripes, don't I?) 00:21, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Extend the stripes a little butm and blur them some on the legs. 00:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Butm? And this is the same stripe style on her warrior image. 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

The white from her tail is too far in, blend it a little better. -- 00:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * bottom, xD, sorry. 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She has a bit of white on her haunch on her warrior image, so I did that here. Or do I get rid of it?.... 00:56, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the warrior image is facing left, and loners face right, so they don't have to match that much. Blur the earpink, darken the shading, lighten the highlights, and blur them a lot. 01:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It just looked weird to me, but whatever. Define your light source so that it falls over the high and low parts of her muscles. 01:25, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think the white on her should be just a bit lighter.. So that we can see the shading and highlights. Mi st  y!  01:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? 03:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a bit more ;) Mi  st  y!  04:10, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a patch on her front leg/arm closest to us 05:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It isn't the same style as her warrior image. Splashpelt is correct. Extend the stripes or re-do them. 20:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll re-do it.(Well the stripes anyway. ;)) 23:18, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows that? 00:15, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

better. Blur the stripes, and it looks kind of 2D. Try using the regular loner shading (See Fleck's loner version under this one.) 00:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Due to the fact, my sister, Flowerpatch isn't on, I want to point this out; Ivystripe uses Gimp, Flowerpatch Does not. Therefore, she can't match the shading, sorry. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:40, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The fact that I have GIMP has no impact on that. I practiced doing the shading and looked at how loners were shaded, on the high parts of theit bodies you just don't add shading, and on the really low points you add extra shading. I could do it without layers. 14:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match her warrior image. Even if you and Mossy use different programs, you can still match it. 16:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Dips head* Okay, I will see what I can do. And Sis, Maple. We BOTH know, I hate it when you try to help me, and I've told already, to NOT comment on any images I do. Lets face it, you hate me, and I hate you. 22:20, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

All programs use the same basic tools, so you should be able to. ;D I use pixlr, and it works just fine. And, try to get along for the sake of PCA. :P I'm sure that if one of you was falling off a cliff, the other would save them. Lol. 23:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sis, Changes are showing now, darken the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:58, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * sighs* Fine fine, I'll try....anyway, Reuploaded, I tried to match the shading style. Changes aren't showing. 13:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think she has ginger on the front leg away from us, or on the back paw either. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, forever <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">flying 17:20, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you dont see the parts i added ginger to, so i did it anyway, she seemed to have more White than ginger, so I added more ginger. 17:28, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh hey, wow, changes are showing, what are the odds? ;) 21:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs farthest from the viewer 21:26, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:24, September 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * gigles* Is the image so good, you can't find a thing wrong with it? Is this why it lacks comments? ;) 02:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back leg seems a lot darker then the rest of her. I suggest lightening it. 03:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad on the white areas. 03:47, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Flower :) Right where the tail starts, where the ginger is, there seems to be a bit of color lighter than the rest of the ginger. 03:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gunger meets the white on the mzzle. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:43, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wow I can't type. -.- I meant Ginger, and Muzzle. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  08:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To make it more consistent, Move the left back leg patch to the top, take the patch on the left front leg off, and make the right front leg patch wrap around the leg. Moonstorm88 11:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, can you explain that? Like dumb it down. Not that I'm dumb! I'm dislexic, so is my sis, and she can't firgure out what you mean, so can you explain it for me? 13:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, is that what you meant? 00:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The changes probably aren't showing. What I meant was to make the back leg behind the pointed one put the patch on the other half of her leg but take the other one off. On the front leg, the one behind the pointed one, take the patch off. On her other front leg, make it so it looks the patch goes around her whole leg. Sorry for the confusion. Moonstorm88 01:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. Thanks, me and My sis, Flowerpatch, HATED the fact we couldn't figure it out, and it should be like... the....sixth one down, i think. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more stripes to the ginger patches, darken the shading on the tail and legs, and blur the ear-pink a bit more. 03:11, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- i added some smaller stripes everyhere and there, darkened the shading on the tail and legs, and blurred the earpink. comments? 17:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail. 23:35, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I made the tail highlight more visabile. Comments? 15:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC) Looks good sis! Just blur the shading a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:49, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- What else? 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the tail highlight. 00:22, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I thought i said this....the tail doesn't have a highlight xP. Reuploaded-Darkend the shading. Comments? 22:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ginger transitions. Looking good, Flowerpatch ;D Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:59, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- Thanks, Elorisa :) 15:21, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the shoulder and haunch highlights. 18:29, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the legs 21:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:45, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty sis! I see nothing wrong with her. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:58, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, please. I can't really even see any visible shading. 23:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki)- For Approval
This was supposed to be here because Cloud is withdrawn. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:18, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we weren't allowed to do that? Post a charart before the images are archived. I may be wrong, but I just thought one of the leads said that atsome point...... *shrugs* Anyways, fi it stays up, redden the earpink a bit and make it bigger. Looks great! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw! I edit conflicted with you 3 times over this. This will be declined and im tired of typing out why. 00:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Icy! XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But I was editing the same time as you, and Lakestream(?) is supposed to be approved. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:32, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is over the limit until something is acutally archived. 00:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's exactly 35 images. I just archived Lakeshine. 00:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. But for future reference, please don't post until the conflicting image is archived. Voleclaw needs a gray nose. 00:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything. 00:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, sorry but there was only 34 when I uploaded but I guess Iceheart beat me to it. :) Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  01:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. 22:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure if changes are showing and @Pearls what do you mean 'Blur everything.' Why does the nose have to be gray? Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  22:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

@Wild Sorry, that was when i wasant thinking. I apologize. 22:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading under the chin and blur the highlight on the chest; it looks a bit blotchy, darken the shading on the right side. 03:04, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail and blur all the highlights. ` 23:23, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

i thought voleclaw was black oh well. Nice job but the shading is blotchy blur it some. 23:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The right earpink looks smaller than the other. Also blur the forehead shading. 00:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just letting you know, you need to work on this or it will be declined. 00:59, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivystripe, yes I know. @CinderxLion, Nope he's dark gray ;) Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  21:56, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  22:08, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

there's something in the highlight on his chest plz fix that. And i know he's dark gray now. 19:33, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ` 00:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  21:16, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (Q) ~For Approval
This is my first charart, please tell me what you think. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

1) De-thumbed it

2) Define highlights (assuming that they're there) 23:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights, make the noese black, blur the earpink, make the earpink longer, and darken the shading. 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

And when you darken the shading, blur it. 23:21, Septembe Minor edit

Preview Add features and media r 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, darken the nosepink, and recenter the earpink. 23:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make her look glossy 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. I know some users don't like using highlights, but since her description specifically says that she has a glossy pelt, they should be used here. Darken the earpink, and you don't really have to make the nose pink. Plenty of black cats have pink noses. Just make sure it matches the ear pink if you leave it as is. 00:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

When she says glossy, I think you just need to make her shiny. Maybe some white will help, but I'm not sure... 00:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, not pure white. But the highlights could have a slightly zig-zag pattern to create the glossy look. That's how the light usually hits a shiny black cat, anyway. 02:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

True, white would make it zebra-ish when I think of it. 04:16, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

You can use this as a reference for how light hits glossy black cats. 16:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think i reuploaded it, i saved the new one with the same name as the old one. Changes aren't showing.  Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 21:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more. 21:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more like Silvereye said. Then make it look a bit more... glossy looking. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. 21:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wait, nevermind that. For some reason I thought this was Night (KM). xD 21:50, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred the ear pink and tried to make her look more glossy. Petal<font color="Yellow">step' 22:05, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, it's way too big xD 22:44, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look way too layered. Blur them out. 01:15, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and thin it out. 02:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

smooth out the highlights on the tail & haunch -- 04:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 06:56, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Redid the shading, hightlights and ear pink. Changes aren't showing. Petal<font color="Yellow">step' 19:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes darker, they're really neon right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Fixed the eyes :) thanks paleclaw  Petal ''<font color="Yellow">step 19:11, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, blur it. 23:15, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the shading. Changes are not showing.  Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 15:03, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The right file isn't showing up, I'm trying to fix it. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 17:09, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing. (finally!) Petal <font color="Yellow">step'  20:00, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Her eye fartherest from us looks....green? And she looks cross eyed. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:50, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the eyes :) (thanks maplepool) Petal <font color="Yellow">step'  16:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink extends too far down. Move it up a few pixels. 13:52, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the earpink. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 19:27, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make her look glossy. 19:18, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and the earpink. ` 23:10, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone tell me how to make her more glossy? I tried making the highlights brighter but they looked too layered, even when I blurred them. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫ 20:02, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just make the highlights light. You might have to redo it, and use brighter highlights. 00:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to make her glossy, it looks better to me. I completely redid her image, I think it looks better than last time. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫  19:30, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste. 02:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are not showing. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫  16:32, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

If you want, I could make it glossy like I did to Shimmerpelt's warrior :-) Blur the tail highlight :3 18:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Would you? Oh, thank you! :) I tried but I kept messing it up T_T ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ  8362☮♫  20:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Pretty sure the changes won't show. Well, the shading might look a little blotchy, but that's up to you to fix :-) I just put in the highlights the way I did Shimmerpelt, the rest is up to you! 22:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks so much! I'll fix the shading soon. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫  20:16, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (Q) ~ For Approval
First charart. Tell me how i did. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 20:26, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed it for you. Blur the shading and highlights. 20:29, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's the 36th image, so it'll be declined. 20:30, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, this was posted before Flight (somehow it got moved down., look at the times) Add light parts to her arms. So many edit conflicts! :P 20:32, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hiya Rainy, it looks good but I think the shading and highlights need to be blurred more. ;) Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart  20:46, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I'll work on the haunch leg by the way. I know it is still a bit darker. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch's shading. 21:42, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Have the shading go all the way up the haunch, and all the way up the shoulder. Blur/smudge it more, and darken the shading a tad on the face. Also, add some shading to the eye. 21:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know that you're about to reupload, but the haunch really needs blurring, and the tail.=) Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart  21:53, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I made the eyes on her warrior art an orange-ish amber color in honor of her name (I actually used three different shades to add depth, you'll have to zoom all the way in to get all three pixels of color). Feel free to download it file and copy the color for the sake of consistency. 23:19, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I re-uploaded awhile ago. Sorry, my dad dragged me away before i could write that i did re-upload. and, i know no one can really zoom in here, but i have different shades for the eyes. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:35, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''Not sure if changes are seen on here, but they can be seen from her file page. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:52, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's better but can be blurred more. Do it on 100% a few times with a big brush it should help SpottedtalonMudears 03:39, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to do it? It wouldn't be a problem. And you can zoom in by saving my file and opening it in any art program. 11:22, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rename it as Sunfish.queen.png and blur shadings. Leaf-storm,13:37,September 9,2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I know the legs need to be tooken care of. i found a method that helps with with blurring now, so i will use that on the legs. I will also re-name it when i am done editing. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 18:37, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Yeah, the whole thing (not including the lineart, obviously. =P) needs to be blurred a LOT. Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart 20:28, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is too much shading on her front legs, lighten that up. 20:31, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, blur the shading a lot. Also define the earpink. 22:44, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''The changes aren't showing here on on her file page though. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 13:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There is too much shading on the front legs and their blotchy anyways. The whole thing still needs shading. Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart 13:57, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''@Silverflower, don't you mean the whole thing needs to be blurred? Also, the shading is getting on my last nerve. I've gone through it 30 times and it's pretty much the same. I've even used the smudge tool. Can someone help me with the shading getting more.. blurier? (however you spell it) Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  20:32, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I just blurred the front leg for Rainface, by her request. 21:08, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Now you need to blur the haunch's shading. 21:10, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''Took care of the haunch's shading, anything else? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Umm....... any comments on this now? Or should it be CBA'd? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  22:31, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I re-named it so i thought i should tell you i re-uploaded. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 23:19, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still looks blotchy. You should use Gaussian Blur (A filter), it doesn't come out blotchy. 23:30, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... Silvereye, not to be rude but i use pixlr and there isn't a Guassian Blur tool there. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 23:48, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There is a gaussian blur on Pixlr. It's just if you don't use layers, there might be a conflict with the lineart. 14:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 18:42, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ummm.. I wasen't doing this in layers. i just took care of the shading and highlights on the first layer. Was i not supposed to do that? because if i wasen't, i'll redo the image and make it look pretty close to this. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, the eyes look almost white. Please rectify this. 20:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. @''Shellheart: They do? Ok, any way, i think i might of fixed that. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:09, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. And sorry I sounded snappy. I felt as if my comments had been ignored. ^^; 21:12, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok Shellheart. This is my first charart so i wouldn't really blame anyone for sounding a bit snappy. I don't understand a bunch of the stuff i did on here and i now think this charart looks amazing. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:34, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and there's also some gray around the charart. 21:37, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I think it is blurred as far as it will go. Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 22:08, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's still gray around the image. 22:13, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Right, thanks for telling me. ''Re-uploaded. ''I think i got all the gray from it. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 22:15, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There stil seems to be some waste around it. I would add a layer and color it a bright floresent color and then you can see where you missed some of the waste. Lighten the highlights or add some and then you might want to use an airbrush/fuzzy brush and make it a color inbetween the highlights and shading and then color over the edge of the shading so it's smoother. And then blur where needed. Nice job! 23:33, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I think this is AMAZING now. Comments? Also, i will TRY to see what i can do to lighten the eyes just a tad. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 18:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I brightened the eyes to match her warriors pretty closly. Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :3 22:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looking better! :) Maybe a tad more blurring on the flank and tail...it's lookin' good! Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart  00:04, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I tried blurring it but it won't blur anymore. Sorry. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 00:41, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want some help with blurring it? 19:16, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, that would be nice Loudsplash. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:29, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the earpink; it looks faded. 23:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''Changes aren't showing yet. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 00:39, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing now. I am ashamed, this looks AWFUL now. *cries* ok, anyway, comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:23, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED ok here it is. I got the idea of using dodge on it to blur it in a way so I blurred it then used dodge on it. Is this any better? 13:11, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. 15:21, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I think you did good blurring it loudsplash, thank you *wugz* Ok, any way, blurred the ear pink to the beyond, comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 18:23, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ummmm... no one has commented in awhile. I am now a bit consernend. lol, jk, but any way, is anyone caring enough to comment? (sorry, i just want this approved SOOO bad!) Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  18:23, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Again, you've lightened the eyes too much. The eyes on the warrior charart are orange, not pale yellow. 18:35, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, haha, sorry. now i am blaming that on the guiassian blur thingy. any way, fixed that. comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 18:44, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is starting to look EPIC! I would blur the stomach highlight a tiny bit. 19:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is kind of blotchy, smoothen it out. 00:08, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. Umm, with the shading and blotchy and smoothing it out, i use pixlr and i want to know HOW to smoothen it out? any one know? i'll take care of the stomach btw. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 00:38, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Well, what do you all think? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:07, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Now it looks like there is no shading. And you should blur the ear-pink a bit. 20:29, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

There was shading, i just made the pelt a tad lighter cause it did say pale gray, err, something like that. any way, Re-uploaded, I liked it before, maybe that's why i liked the shading before. one comment and i undo the shading and change the picture back. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:42, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and haunch. 01:49, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Ugh, this thing gets worser and worser every time i edit it now. kinda not long ago, it was Epic and now i think it has just gotten worser sense then. :P Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  02:03, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Chill, hun. Sunfish is just a tricky cat to make, trust me. Light, solid colored cats typically are. You're doing fine. Just darken the shading until it looks to match the warrior charart and blur the ear pink. It's all about consistency. 14:36, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also brighten the earpink to a shade that a light colored cat would have, which usually is a pale/soft pink. 21:32, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

i'm gonna fix that as soon as my cpu decided to recognize pixlr. errr, today is just mean. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 22:04, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose a tad 15:34, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

ok, i am fricking going to find something to do with this. i re-did it to make the colors match and it won't show anything! i saved it 30 billion times! errrrr. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:43, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, it's showing now :P Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  19:19, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh noes! i forgot the nose color! err, i'll fix that.... Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  19:27, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed :D Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  22:31, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks a little weird--might wanna fix that. The top of the highlighting on the haunch, shoulder, and back need to be blurred more. Sorry, I know you're frusterated because you've blurred it a gazillion times..... Silver 'wuvz 'he'r f'ri'en'ds 00:24, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

oh great, IT UPLOAED THE WRONG FRICKING ONE! *kicks cpu in anger* Rain  face &lt;3 00:19, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

oh wait, nyeh, stupid piece of scrap. any way, if you wanna see the real image and how it's supposed to look cause it won't show anything here, click here. Rain face &lt;3 00:32, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, it's showing now, awkward. Comments? (i think it is LOVELY!) Rain  face &lt;3 17:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

NOW IT'S NOT! WHAT THE HECK IS HAPPENING?! Rain face &lt;3 18:36, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Don't use capital letters, please. The changes may not be showing because there are too many chararts being uploaded at once. Blur the back shading more. 21:03, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Soot (Lo) ~ For approval
Comments? 22:53, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

My first loner. xD And I've blurred everything as much as I can. 22:55, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink just a tad more? If not, I understand. 22:56, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awww dang it Dx I was just about to post Piketooth, and chu beat me to it. Ah well, back to waiting. This looks great, Define the highlights a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry! Don't worry, Firekit is also approved, and will be archived soon. Re-Uploaded. 23:04, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not your fault. Don't worry ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:08, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait... aren't her eyes green? They look blue to me. 23:59, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

They're teal, but I'll change it to emerald green. Re-Uploaded. 00:00, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink. 05:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the back leg. 15:09, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tiny bit smaller and a bit more red. 15:20, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaaded. 23:37, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I just noticed my typo above. xD Blend the highlights and shading a little more if possible. They still clash with each other. 00:53, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:53, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a little more. 02:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:51, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail (E) ~ For Approval
Here she is 00:22, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, blur the earpink, and she doesn't have a brown tip on the top of her ear. 00:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks blotchy, make the earpink triangula, wheres your light source? -- 00:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do everything in the morning. And the light source is like above her muzzle. 00:26, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. 00:28, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Seriously? I just had 4 edit conflicts with all of you. I think you should redo teh shading to make it less blotchy, and do the shading according to Nightshine's tutorial. Also, the earpink is blotchy. 00:30, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

If the light source is there, then there shouldn't be shading on BOTH sides of the tail & on the forehead -- 00:41, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

All the shading really needs blurring...and the tail is really blotchy. Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart 01:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Silverflower, there is no need to repeat what has already been said. 01:39, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'm just going to redo this, if I don't have it up by 9 then I won't be able to do it until tomorrow. Sry... 12:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED better? I have serious issues with ear pink XP 12:37, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, blur ear-pink Leaf-storm,14:02,September 10,2011 (UTC)

Better! thin out the shading on the tail & make the shading a darker tan like the others -- 15:55, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink just a bit more triangular? I'm horrible at that too x3 Mi  st  y!  16:06, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the face. This is comin' along very nicely! ^_^ 12:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED can someone help me thin out the shading on the tail? I'm having serious trouble with that. But that's all I need help with. Is this a dark enough tan or should i make it any darker? 16:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help! -- 16:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. 16:31, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded There ya go. Changes arent showin' yet x) -- 16:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thank you. 16:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  09:46, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I will not lighten the shading as I was told to darken it. Shouldn't this be approved soon? No rush but I haven't gotten a comment that needs reuploaded for in... 15:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

You will lighten the shading if someone suggests it. We're here to help you make this image the best it can be. It won't get approved (let alone a CBA) if all you're doing is being stubborn. Plus, the shading's way too dark anyways. 16:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * sigh* REUPLOADED Again, not trying to be stubborn or annoying but it was darkened so it would match the warriors charart. Arg...(i'm beginning to hate this image more and more) 17:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Now it looks better. It's an odd color to work with, if you ask me. Now, can you smudge the ear pink back into the ear? 17:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED is this any better? Arg, I has serious issues with elder earpink XP 18:12, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and smoothen out the shading. 21:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

How do you smoothen out shading? I've never really done it before, I know, it's sad ;\ 11:57, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

To do that, you can use either of these methods: You can use a huge brush and set the rate on 100% and blur it, you can smudge it then blur the smudge, or you can use the gaussian blur tool on a very high setting. This method works in GIMP, so if you use Pixlr, then you'd probably have to ask a Pixlr user (my method can work on Photoshop too since they're essentially the same thing) 17:30, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I use pixlr but I also use gimp XP But I won't have access to gimp until friday or saturday....I may just need to download gimp on this computer but I dunno :| so if this isn't reuploaded until friday or saturday that's because I didn't download gimp so yeah, I don't know... 18:29, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dull and lighten the shading. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 02:01, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REUPLOADED i dont think the changes are showing... 17:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:30, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED not sure if the changes are showing...anyway, this is as much as I can blur it on pixlr and this is the one comp that doesnt have gimp. Might have to download it though... 11:59, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

smooothe out the shading and blur it, make the shading a golden-tan color, make the earpink neat & triangular, and add some shading between the haunch and the front leg -- 15:28, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me do it again? I can do the earpink. And do you want the shading in the front or back. 12:33, September 19, 2011 (UTC

I can try helping you. But what do you mean by doing it again? Do you just want it blurred, or do you want help with just the general overall thing? 15:37, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty much the whole thing. And by when I mean doing it again I mean helping me with it again. Thanks. 16:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

So, redo the shading too? 16:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. 16:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, well here's the thing, if I redo the shading and blur ir for you, as well as the highlights, I might as well have done the picture for you. So here's what I'm going to suggest- I'm going to show you a picture on how to shade an elder. It should help you. After you do that, then I will blur it for you. Does that sound fair? By the way, this image should help: It's ok to copy off of them. 17:07, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

REDONE Alright I completely redid it. Not sure if changes are showing or not...also, I gave her a graying muzzle and i'm not sure whether that was a good decision or not... 17:27, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing and i dunno why its on the right side... 17:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Still doesnt look right... darken the shading and blurr it -- 22:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, changes STILL aren't showing, anyway REUPLOADED Ivystripe are you going to blur it? Could you blur this image, thanks 20:33, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, sorry, I didn't know if you wanted me to after you redid it. I'll blur it for you. 21:29, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded there you go =) I also fixed a miscolored pixil on the foot. Hopefully this helps! 21:44, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Iveh, comments??? 18:00, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:16, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh forgot to say that the changes aren't showing. So go to her history and see it. 22:21, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nicee 8) darken the shading & blurr it more. Also in some areas theres some uneeded/extra shading & highlights -- 02:16, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED alrighty i reuploaded but the image is on the text so can someone fix it, I can't seem to get it down....and the changes aren't showing, I think... 14:34, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it for you. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:22, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) ~ For Approval


AT LAST!! Okay, here he is! Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:40, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tooth a tad bit smaller as even a cat with protruding teeth wouldn't be that big. Define the shading on the back feet, especially th one furthest away 02:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The tooth doesn't even look like it's hanging from the jaw, it looks like it's hanging beneath the chin. Either make some curves to the jaw to make it fit the tooth (tweak the lineart), or make it look like an exposed tooth from either angle :p 02:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I will play with it. Lets see what happens. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:52, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I messed....erm...played with his muzzle, and shark his tooth....so.....comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

If the tooth is going to be there, atleast put a little bit of shading there. and you should make him a little more glossy. 12:21, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you should like draw a mouth... then put the tooth in. Blur the earpink, it's blotchy. 15:41, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't say he is glossy in the book, or in his desc. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:51, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- i tried to make him glossy(even thou he was never TOLD to be glossy, and messed with the tooth.) Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:13, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

XD Looks cool! Maybe try moving the tooth up a little bit. It looks a tad like it`s protruding from below his mouth. It *giggle* looks like a goatee.Make the ear-pink fill the ear little more too. I sometimes imagine alll the elders with flowing, long, luscious, black mustaches and getting all the she-cats because of their good looks XD *bursts out laughing* 16:30, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, i've been gronded, so has Flowerpatch, so we can't work on our images, so please dont decline them. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:12, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * groans8 i can't get his tooth to look right, it annoys me. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

If it's less than a week you'll be fine, otherwise someone will be allowed to take them over. 18:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

As I suggested before, draw in the mouth and move the tooth up so it doesn't look like his teeth are coming out of his chin. Then again, does it even really need the tooth? Stonetooth's teeth aren't showing despite his description. 20:33, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, i think he might, and I'll sneak on every now and then so i can work on this, same for flower. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:40, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so I re-did him, beauce of two reasons; One1 He looked red-brown. Two. I have decied to not show his hooked tooth. Stonetooth doesn't have a hooked tooth on his images. So...comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:50, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the markings a bit. 03:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and fix the blurred lineart, also on the ear. 06:25, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

REdden the earpink. I love the stripes. :) 23:23, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thatnks :) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a ton. 01:14, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Break up the stripe on the back a tad, at least, not entirely straight. There's also a few miscolored pixils in the ear with the earpink, it has a little of the main pelt color instead of the darker one. Nice job so far 16:01, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, wich stripe on his back? There is like 7 stripes on his back. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:39, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also redden the earpink, it looks too pink. 00:23, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

The ones that runs across his whole back. Just make it slightly irregular. 01:04, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm don't know how to explain this... Uhh, I guess can you blur the stripes on his tail a bit more? xD Also blur the ear pink more :3 Looks really good! :D Mi  st  y!  21:44, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I'll get right on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and blur it also darken the shading 21:52, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also redden the earpink. 23:39, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, I swear, this is the last time i change his colors. Like that, Ivystripe? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:35, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, we're only here to help. XD Make the ear pink a little more pink. 14:03, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh cloudskye, the only help I 'need' is mental help, buacese, i am insane, however, i enjoy being insane, so i refuse help XD Okay, upload in a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:00, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

ReUploaded-made the ear-pink more pink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:14, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can I get some comments? I've been staring at the recent wiki for a few hours now. I'm going mad. Dx Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:42, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mad you say? xD lighten the tail shading -- 21:45, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool please dont over comment on your own image. Or any. I think Ive told you that before. Darken the shading between trhe shoulder and the haunch, and the back of the neck. It look kida flat right now. 02:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Idk if you did. I don't think someone told me that, Sorry Dx. I think i got it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:18, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Bluring and smudging spree is needed! yeah lots of bluring and smudging and alose blur the ear pink 21:38, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, um, i sumdged the stripes, and that is a big 'No' for sumdging. It killed the image. So, i just blurred. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:42, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The reason Stonetooth doesn't have teeth out is because they were long teeth, Piketooth should have them because his description says 'protruding canine teeth'. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  21:14, September 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * shurgs.* I don't really want to, but I will, but ONLY if a few more users agree. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 01:05, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Y'know. I should make you re-do this. After all, it seems all you did was use something from Ivystripe's tutorial. After all, PCA is supposed to be a place where you do your own "original work", and not use someone else's blank. However, if no one else agrees, then I guess it stays. 02:49, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we where allowed to use redlines?.....Or was everything i read a lie? i'll redo it. Give me like 15 mins.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:51, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I personally don't think redlines should be allowed. It doesn't give people the chance to try their own work. 02:54, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

alright, i'll just redo this, *god, save me, tabbies are not my strong point Dx* Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:56, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, i know this looks bad. But i tried, right Dx Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:23, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Uploading again, tring to get it to show. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:25, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful! Define the shading a little. 03:28, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thanks :D Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-He had some blurred lineart, and some stripes weren't blurred. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:12, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (K) - For Approval
I'm actually quite proud of him ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  03:29, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! This looks excellent. Darken the highlights ever so slightlty. 03:31, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the bottom part of the white not so long, like make it in the shape of his chin like in his leader. Wonderful work! 03:33, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Better? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  03:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular. 11:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. 20:29, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''REUPLOADED~ Better? ^^ ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:53, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 20:55, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, too. :3 23:11, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white muzzle some more. :3 21:04, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded :3 Better~? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:08, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The side`s highlights is very bright. Gotta wear shades. *Puts on aviator glasses*. Darken the side a bit. 02:09, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

xD Fallenstars! Try to smudge or blur the top of the white muzzle. 01:19, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't say on his article that he has a white muzzle, nor is it stated elsewhere. Please remove the white. 19:24, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (A) ~ For Approval
Here is the other version that I have just made using the suggestions you all made. How does it look? ~Cloudclaw1

Make it look like her queen image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, see her queen image, it is a mainly white, like you did, but the tabby patches are light brown and the stripes are a different style. When you see the queen picture, also make sure to have the patches match up to where they are on the queen image. Just thought that would help. :) 23:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

What happened to all the comments that were here before? o.o Did they get deleted? Anyways, blur the patches adn the earpink a bit more, anad mke the earpink lighter and more natural, it's really hot pink right now. Also, there seems to be a lot of blured or miscolored lineart, I suggest pasting a whole new blank over it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:07, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Match the colors and everything from the queen image, and add more shading. 00:20, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps smudge the patches upwards using a tiny brush for kind of a fur effect? Also, smudge the stripes and darken them and make the earpink a little smaller. 00:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

o.o Oh no!! The blurring of the patches!!! Darnnnn... I'll redo it now

/just went through the history to see where all the posts went. Cloudclaw, when you reupload the file, don't delete all the posts, just type Reuploaded in bold below all the comments, so people know it's reuploaded. We're not supposed to delete comments from talk pages. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:05, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

@Paleclaw okkk i didnt realise at first

Reuploaded

Cloudclaw, remember to sign with the four ~'s just in case. 01:29, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a much lighter pink color. You can take it off of an approved white cat, such as Whitewing. Make sure it doesn't touch the lineart. 03:10, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look fullsized. Use this one ;. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

@Maplepool I don't see a difference with the charart and @Ivystripe i'll fix that soon!

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No, Maple's right, this isn't the full sized blank. Though it's not THAT much smaller, it is smaller. You'll have to redo it with the full sized blank, sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:08, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

And make sure the earpink doesn't fill the whole ear. 00:06, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 01:25, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ For Approval
I'm pretty sure Beetlenose's kit image isn't taken. And I think it's under 35 (until I posted this) So here it is. This is my first charart so I hope I did well... ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄ <sup style="font-family:Papyrus;color:Navy">Freezing in the Summer!  01:55, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

kewl (de-thumbed it) define the shading some & add earpink x) -- 02:16, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

And make the nose a dark grey. 02:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are the eyes filled in? Sorry, but my own eyes are acting up again...so, it's kinda hars for me to see. 04:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're right Cloudy. The eyes aren't filled in. 09:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

add earpink, Make the nose black, lighten the highlight ont he tail. 22:01, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄ <sup style="font-family:Papyrus;color:Navy">Freezing in the Summer! 23:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

And rename this Beetlenose.kit.png. 00:32, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok I filled in the eyes some more, changed the nose color, added the ear pink, renamed the picture, and everything else :P ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄ <sup style="font-family:Papyrus;color:Navy">Freezing in the Summer!  06:05, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cool! Now make the earpink smaller, and blur it. 16:38, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok. Took me a while to get the earpink just right..but I got it! I hope it looks a bit better now. ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄ <sup style="font-family:Papyrus;color:Navy">Freezing in the Summer! 17:02, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed it for you. Okay, move his ear-pink up, it looks odd where it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:22, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

You need to take one of the png.'s out of the name. 02:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little more red, please. 18:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yes, she gets a loner charart. I like the way it turned out. Comments? 23:41, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Define the light part (either unshaded or highlighted part) of her tail. 23:42, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Great, Take her earpink color from her queen image, will you? i dont want to get an inconsistancy :P 23:51, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I did take it from the queen image, the shading must have gotten to it. So I'll just lighten the shading on the earpink. 00:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also, there is some waste on the outside of her ears. 01:37, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 23:32, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Can you blur the highlights more? also, define the shading. 23:41, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''My StarClan, layers make everything so easy. :3 01:04, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the highlights a tad. 13:59, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 00:16, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the image slightly? 02:11, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 04:32, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller please. 04:07, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 18:34, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (A) - For approval
...Yeah, comments? 01:19, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Define the patches a lot though, they're pretty over-blurred. And maybe make the earpink stand out a bit more against the pelt too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:50, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Hehe, thanks! Yes, I realize that there is inconsistant coloring in the lineart and there is waste. GIMP is acting up and I hope that it'll return to normal on the next upload. So if your going to say "get rid of the waste", or "redo the lineart" or of something like that, I will ignore it for this upload. Thanks! 04:08, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Atelda! Make the white more white, it looks kind of brown to me. 21:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Theres waste near the butm. Er, Bottom. 21:23, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darkent eh shading. Good job! 22:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the paws if you haven't, if you have, define the smudges. 23:34, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:58, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is going to sound stupid, but shouldn't the white be on the INSIDE of the tail? It just seems odd on the outside. 17:58, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I always imagined her when her tail is down to have the white on the outside. Oh well. 00:58, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make a little less of the chest white. 02:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like wise? (I don't think changed are showing...) 02:40, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Define the earpink a tad. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:22, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The ginger patches need to be more ginger and defined. Looks good though. 18:36, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like that? 19:14, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

the patches are still over blurred define them. Othe than that awesome job! 19:19, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that they are over-blurred, they need to be brightened to match the warrior image. Also define the earpink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, so I took the images from the warrior image, keep in mind. Also, sorry for the delay, my computer was being oddly slow, but it's fixed. :3 23:49, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lakeshine (Q) - For Approval
Smudge tool. Is my best friend. I <3 this one a lot. Comments? 02:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Since the fur around her nose is white, I think the nose needs to be pink, I'm fairly sure. Define the earpink a tad. 03:07, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I just made it black since her warrior image has a black nose. I'm pretty sure nose colors don't change overnight. 03:13, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The warrior blanks all have black noses though.

Um...I had this reserved, and it was removed from my name? Why? :( I loved my version. Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  19:32, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Your reservastion extended 2 weeks. 20:29, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Did you get the colors off of her warrior charart? It seems darker. 21:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :D Put some more white on the hind foot. 23:36, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the gray on the head so it matches his warrior image, and also blur the gray so it's not smudged. We don't need to tweak the warrior image to match. Looks great~ :) Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  13:39, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pinken the earpink. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:54, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 23:08, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (A) - For Approval
Done with my first.. Now onto my second >:D Mwahhaaa.. Comments? I know it looks pretty bad. >.< Oh, and I'm adding the ear pink right now seems that I have forgot that. o.O Mi  st  y!  17:43, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it as longhaired, all riverClan cats are. Leaf-storm,18:01,September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do that, but his elder charart is short-haired, should that be tweaked? :/ Mi  st  y!  18:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yea, i guess so... Ok, can i tweak the elder thingy if it needs to be tweaked? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 18:36, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think you have to ask a lead for that.. But I dunno >.< Anyways, reuploaded. How does it look now? Mi st  y!  19:07, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Good, try to center the ear pink a bit. and rename this: loudbelly.apprentice.png. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:08, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur it a lot, and blur (if any) the highlights. Blur the earpink and perhaps redden it as well. And to Rainface, only warriors are allowed to tweak the images. Sorry. 19:29, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did wait Rainface said, and I will get on to what you said, Splashspelt. Mi st  y!  21:57, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger. 22:36, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There, did everything. How about now? Mi st  y!  23:19, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights aren't big enough...take a look at the tutorial on how to do shading for apprentices. 23:39, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Is it okay if I just withdraw this? I really want to just practice first... It seems like a lot of people use GIMP, and I use Pixlr which doesn't seem to work out with me.. >.< Mi  st  y!  00:03, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

No, Pixlr is okay. My computer can't download gimp, and I've always used pixlr, and my chararts aren't all that bad. Just use the dodge tool, size 50, midtones, and draw the highlights. Do you want help? 00:04, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

That would be greatful... Second time already? xD After this I'll practice a bit more then do more charart.. Mi st  y!  00:08, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Done! Its my first solid-colored apprentice, so it might not be the best. Its the second file on the file page. 00:17, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! Its great! :D Sorry for the trouble... I hope you don't mind. Thank you again! :) Mi  st  y!  01:34, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What color are his eyes? I'm having a rough time seeing them. 23:15, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

They are like.. a shade of green i think. Oh, sorry that i'm not mistypebble, thought that i should say that. I would copy and paste it on whatever program you use and zoom in if you can't see the eye color. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:46, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded (for some reason its showing the short haired version of him..) I changed the eye color to the one he was showed with as an elder, if that's alright. Mi st  y!  01:53, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Coolio! Blur the tail shading. 12:24, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How does it look? Mi st  y!  16:34, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can you center the ear pink? It kinda looks like it's touching the lineart. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 20:42, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to center it, but I had to make it smaller >.< Mi  st  y!  19:04, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? .3. Mi  st  y!  21:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sparrowkit (Ki) - For Approval
Anyone remember me putting this up back in my first days of PCA :D? Anyways, comments? 00:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I remember seeing this a loooooooong ago. So, the default for a tabby is brown? Huh. Also, can you link a few of the markings? It's cute! 00:44, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, wait, I made my own. I don't know why changes aren't showing. >_> 00:46, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, it's showing. 00:47, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! Look! They're finally showing. xD Define the markings, please. 00:50, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also, darken the shading a tad. 00:56, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:48, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pupils bigger please. Cute! 02:04, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wait... how do I make the pupils bigger? Because when I try, he looks creepy. So do I just tweak the eye? 02:16, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Just make two more pixils (vertically) beside the existing one. 02:23, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 03:09, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! :3 I think you should add a little mroe shading to the tail tip. 12:25, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Put some shading below his chin, where his neck is. 15:19, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

MAke the white of the eyes smaller. 02:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose pink. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and, changes won't show. >_> 23:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ottersplash (Q) - For Approval
Not completely happy with this. :P Oh well. XD Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops, forgot to save the .xcf file over the .png file. XD Colors should match the warrior version now. Changes aren't showing though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:33, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the shading a teensy bit pwease. I <3 this! :3 02:35, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the spot above the hind feet where theres supposed to be shading. X) -- 02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:05, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, what a purdy kitty <3 Make the shading on the tail tip less circle-looking, if you know what I mean. Blurring it might help. 04:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad. It looks a bit pink orange at the moment, make it pink red. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:49, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks like Mapleshade! Blur the tail shading on the white and on the neck. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:58, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Shading's now blurred as much as it possibly can be. Changes aren't showing. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

This..is..beautiful! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:59, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Thank you, but are you looking at the right one? I just defined the earpink in the last upload, but the changes aren't showing. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:55, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nutmeg (KP) (Q) ~ For Approval
I did my best with this. It's my first tabby, and she's only one of two kittypet queens we have (the other being Quince), so I decided to include her collar. Comments? 03:59, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the lineart for the collar a little thicker? This looks really neat, Shelly! 04:01, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the bell thingamabob closer to the center of the chest -- 04:04, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thickened the collar lines and moved the name tag, but I think I might re-shape it in the morning now that I look at it. Changes not showing, of course. 04:19, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden/define the earpink more. Fantastic! 04:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This does look amazing! Define the nose pink a bit, I think, It looks too white at the moment. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I love this Shelly! Define the tail shading. 11:29, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Those stripes are beautiful! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I really love this! Darken the shading some more. 12:57, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! There is some white pixils on her nametag, get rid of those. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:05, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The collar should be more circular in shape. Makr the light part on her belly a consistant shape because right now it extends down in a strange way. A lot of the stripes need to be blurred some because the tool you used to do them with is obvious. The stripes get lost at the end of her tail, define those. I had kind of wanted to do this one haha 21:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Reddened the ear-pink and defined it as well. Darkened the nose. Smudged the stripes a tiny bit and added some stripes to the tail. Defined the shading. Rounded out the collar and tag. Fixed teh belly white. @Ivystripe: What tool? I just used the pencil in GIMP... 22:36, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the highlight on the face just a tad? 18:08, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job! Just lighten the base of the tail. Other than that i can't see anything wrong with it. 19:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

There's specks of waste around the whole image. Lighten the belly shading so it doesn't look too gray. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:57, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes not showing. 21:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you may have blurred some lineart on the bell thing on the collar, and define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 01:01, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The highlights on the haunch seem a little white. 01:07, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes not showing. 20:12, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (A) ~ For Approval
I can't help but say that this is a fail. First tabby, second image. I pulled the colors from his leader image. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Put some dapples in to match the warrior and deputy art. 04:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; I added Dapples. Wait for Changes to Show... <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is not a fail, it's awesome! Add more stripes to the haunch and define the tail stripes. 04:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Thanks... <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This looks nice! There's some waste around most of the charart - a thin line. You can see it if you tilt the screen a bit. erase that please. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Niceeee. x3 Define the shading. 13:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Changes aren't showing. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 14:58, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The color almost looks kind of off to me. 21:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the base brown is too dark. Try lightening it just a tad. Maybe it's just the shading...but I don't think so. 18:23, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know the white muzzle is on his other images, but he was never described with one so can you get rid of it? <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

If it is too dark, in GIMP (or maybe another thing) you can go to 'Color' and then 'Brightness-Contrast..' and you can lighten the whole image without some serious work. 01:09, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights and this is good! 12:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Again, highlights are optional =) Just define your light parts (where it's not shaded) 21:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not being on. I'll work on it now. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 19:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) - For Approval
My gosh, it seems like such a long time since I posted a charart here. I know I've been a bit inactive recently, but I'm going to try and be more active from now on. And, I realise there is no ear pink, Pixlr was down when I tried to do it, so I'll do it on Sumopaint or something later. I just wanted to get the image up whilst there was a space. So, comments? Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have done earpink. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  09:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a lot. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the highlights more smooth. 15:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define your light-source, define the shading, then blur the high-lights and the shading. And take the ear-pink from Hollyleaf or Nightcloud. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She needs the scar across her eye too. 18:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. Mi st  y!  19:02, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She does not need a scar, as her scar is on her left eye. 02:18, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add earpink, and blur the highlights(hope Im lookin' at the right one) -- 02:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I was using the same eye as the kittypet XD 19:40, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink darker, it looks to bright right now. Take the earpink from Hollyleaf. 15:27, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Look up  to the past…  16:03, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Try to blur the ear pink a lot, and make the shoulder highlight just a tad bit bigger. :3 Mi  st  y!  20:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (K) - For Approval
Ta-da! I've done better than this. 11:53, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Before I say something, did you use an off-white for his face? 12:07, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

No…its probably just the shading ;) 12:22, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Snowy! Just define the earpink, make it more pink and less purple. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Can you make it so it matches its leader image? the pelt is kinda blurred. 12:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)'''

Also, he looks more gray than black. Nice! 15:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I blurred it too much. 15:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the tail longer? 15:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot to mention this, in his leader image, he is smudged a tad, if you also want to include smudges. 15:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I failed on the tail. :l Changes aren't showing. 16:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail a little less pointy. 18:41, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:25, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know you already did this, but can you make the dark gray look more black? And also, define the earpink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:52, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

If I darken it, it'll be just a regular black. I'll define the earpink though. 22:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Meh, I darkened it slightly. 23:16, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe separate both sides of the black so the midriff is more white. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:56, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Skyheart (A) - For Approval
Yep, here's Skyheart at her apprentice age. I'll blur the stripes more if I need to. 12:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I forgot tehear pink, so I added it. Changesaren't showing yet. 12:12, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Hm, lighten and blur the earpink a little. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

First of all, the heading should be Skyheart (A) - For Approval. Second of all, blur the stripes a lot x3 13:49, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add another stripe right where the haunch starts. This is great! 15:18, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the heading for you :) Blur the earpink as well, and define the shading. 15:33, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more light stripes, nice work! Leaf-storm,16:39,September 18,2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around the charart 21:22, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink -- 02:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add smaller stripes <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  08:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it when I get home from school. 11:15, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 23:18, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it on Saturday. School, y u keep me busy? Dx  21:08, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (KP) ~ For Approval


My first image, what do you think? She has a KP name, so i made that image. Comments? Moonkitti 15:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm.. Blur the earpink 15:59, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good for your first image, round the bottom of her ear-pink Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. This is really good for your first image, Moonkitti! 16:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks guys! Changes aren't showing. Moonkitti 16:17, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She has got scar on her left eye but it doesn't matter, i think Leaf-storm,16:36,September 18,2011 (UTC)

I think that is her left eye o.O. Moonkitti 16:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! :D Define the tail highlights. And the scar looks kind of uneven o.O 16:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thanks, and that is because it is blurred. Moonkitti 17:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, changes aren't showing, it should be the 2nd one down. ;) Moonkitti 17:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Put highlights down the forearm, but not all the way to the bottom. 18:40, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The scar goes on her other eye. Her left, not yours. 18:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a bit more. Mi st  y!  19:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Moved her scar over, add a highlight to her forearm, blurred the shading and highlights. Moonkitti 19:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I was fixing some blurred lineart. Moonkitti 01:21, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch and the front leg shading please? (I'm a bit naggy over shading xD) Mi  st  y!  01:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink curve with her head, it'll look more natural. 01:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Did she have a collar in the book? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">The evil juggler! 02:13, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading/highlights to the eyes. 20:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, the scar is on the wrong eye again. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 20:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It probably has to do with the server. Sometimes, the changes will show, and other times they won't. 20:15, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Flossie looks gray. I thought she was supposed to be black.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:14, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights less circular. Think about the muscles where the sun is hitting. That should make it look more natural. 01:12, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

@Kittycat, It is just the highlights. Get right on it. And the image is the 2nd one down. Moonkitti 02:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

And I don't know, so....I just went along with it, i don't have the book, so I can't check, but I'd think not, so should I get rid of it? Moonkitti 02:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Got rid of the colloar, i messed with the highlights and shaing, made her look more black. Moonkitti 02:46, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Love it! Blur the shading and highlights. 15:23, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy and kind of bright. Take it off of an approved black cat, such as Crowfeather 21:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Having no collar sort of gives me the impression that she's naked, but oh well. Blur the part where the highlights meet the shading and vice versa at the middle of her body.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:23, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, Crowfeather isn't black, he is dark gray. Hollyleaf or Shadowstar Would be better. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:51, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot ^^; Yeah, take Maplepool's suggestion instead. 21:09, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-i took the ear-pink from hollyleaf. I've blurred as much as i can on pixril, it is having no effect what-so ever, can someone with gimp do it fro me? Moonkitti 16:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks brown. Make it darker...I can't blur it for you, since I use pixlr too. 23:29, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Screech (PH) - For approval
Hey look, I stuck with a character! (I redid most of his to-be) My friend says the mud looks like muscles, but I'll see what you guys think. Comments for improvement? 02:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I just found some waste. Lemme get rid of that 02:43, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, ok, NOW comments for improvement? xD 02:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the edges/corners of the patches. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  08:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and that's mud, not patches. 15:19, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, maybe smallen the eaar pink? <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:53, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, it fills the whole ear where it indicates and I've smudged the bottom into the earpink to make it look like ear fur. 15:19, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

This is looking nice! Redden the ear-pink and texture the mud a bit, (like with mottled cats), it looks a bit too sleek, and darken the shading on his left hind paw. 23:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:30, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, brighten the head hgihlight & smudge/blur the mud on his face -- 02:54, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:36, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit, it blends in with the fur too much. 23:25, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:28, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (Alt L)~ For Approval
Comments? 02:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the tail and paw. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 02:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should work in the scars. But man, that looks powerful. 02:45, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Niceee X) Teh earpink looks kinda too red & theres this white spec on his front paw -- 02:47, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Clever me forgot to save the layers. Anyway, i wont be able to reupload until friday, but i might be able to get on the internet, but dont count on it. See y'all in 5 days! 05:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! I love this! But anyways lighten the shading on the back and darken it on the left side :P 21:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (W) ~ For Approval
Bleh... Not sure if I like this or not... Anyway, comments? 04:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Lighten the patches, though. If the patches are the right color, then lighten the tabby stripes. 04:17, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  08:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the highlights on the tail brighter <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  08:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Epic!! I would blur the chest highlight. 19:47, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste on the tip of the tail, where her neck meets her back, and her chin. 21:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may not be showing... Now back to history hw... -.- 02:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the stripes. They're very unrealistic and awkward - they stick out into the white. Define the ear pink and the shading. Darken the tail and paws shading. Define the edges of the patches. 01:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (A) ~ For Approval
Here she is. Not bad in my opinion. Comments? 18:34, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink match the leader image, and lighten the spots to match as well. 18:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading also. 18:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the highlights, and can you make the highlights on the shoulder just a tad bit bigger? Oh, and blur the ear pink. x) Mi  st  y!  19:16, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I was gonna do this image. Oh well x) Blur the stripes on the tail. 19:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the markings along the chest match the leader image. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I lightened the markings, mathced the earpink, and blurred it. I blurred the tail stripes and darkened the shading, and blurred it. I think I kinda made the shading worse. 07:24, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make her front paws a bit more darker, (match the leader image with it, make them brown I guess xD) and blur the shading. Mi st  y!  20:08, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I blurred the shading, but don't think changes are showing that well. 07:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

The background should be transparent. 23:15, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) ~ For Approval
Here she is? My second charart. Comments? 19:52, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think you used the right blank. It seems too small for an apprentice. You'll need to re-do it using the proper sized blank. 19:56, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yea, also, is there some white above her eyes? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Here, this is the full-sized blank: Using this, redo your image (sorry :c ), then reupload this. It doesn't look bad, you know. 21:04, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED.. I fixed the blank :P I got it from the PCA page if thats that right one :PP. Comments? 21:20, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks a bit small. Yes, I looked on the image history to see if it was the correct revision. Did you save it by clicking it to be full size? 21:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's still not the right size. Also, use the color from her warrior image. 21:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)\

REUPLOADED. Finally got the right size. (Thanks Ivystripe!) I also got her warrior color. Comments? 22:04, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's the right size, but now it looks all blurry and such. I don't think you saved the file right, Firestar. 22:08, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I saved it as PNG on pixlr.com 20:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

That's good :3 Blur the shading on the back and the ear pink. Mi st  y!  21:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Then reupload this or redo this again. The lineart is all blurry, and you can't fix this by hand. 22:00, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. If it doesnt work I'll redo it. 20:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did it. :P 22:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:51, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink a tad 16:53, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">!  23:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (Ki) ~ For Approval
Got to post this quick before the slot goes XD 20:12, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, she's cute! Blur the earpink a tad ;3 20:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:51, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. 23:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights a bit. :3 Mi  st  y!  00:34, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:32, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose the same color as the earpink, or a darker grey. Cute! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  16:05, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose, and blur the shading. ` 21:32, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  21:46, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brightsky (Q) ~ For Approval
Gah.... I failed at the stripes. I tired my best to get them to look some-what close to her warrior version's, but I believe I failed. Anyway, comments? 03:23, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

No! No you didn't! This is awesome! define the ear-pink a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes that criss-cross, I can hardly see them. Blur the light part and/or highlight on her belly. Marvelous work ^^ 03:31, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

You didn't fail, Rainy. Make the stripes on the forehead closer together. 03:41, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't move the stripes, as I tried to match them with her warrior image's. 03:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches please. This is epic, dear. :3 10:09, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the highlights. 21:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, Rainy! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 21:42, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Reuploaded. '''I blurred the shading around the 'highlights', but, as they are not needed, I didn't add them. 00:56, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the tail; its too gray. 23:04, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (Ki) ~ For Approval
Gotta do this quick before the opening closes. Okay, I don't sync well with tabbies. This is a fail. Comments? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing 

Define the shading and possibly connect a few stripes to the other side of the lineart. :3 20:17, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes smaller, curvier, thicker, define the earpink, and darken the shading. ` 20:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but what exactly do you mean by connect the stripes? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 21:41, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think connecting the stripes means to commenct the small stripes to form thicker stripes. 21:43, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. 22:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink & define it --

Make the stripes thicker, and less of them. Darken the shading a bit too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:02, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I will get to that as soon as I can. I'm redoing the image. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:37, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Tawnypelt (Alt. W2) - For Approval
I borrowed the colors from Mosspelt's alternate. Comments? <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:12, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, define the shading a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:14, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:42, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Should this have tabby stripes, or am I mistaken? Because she looks like a golden tabby to me but I don't know if braken-colored counts. 20:50, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front legs a bit and make the ear pink more triangular. :3 Mi  st  y!  22:03, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading, and make the earpink bigger. 23:02, September 22, 2011 (UTC)