Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Cinderfur (D) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be darker. OA was Shaf Girl with a tweak by Cloudy, then another by Leaf-storm. Needed to be darker. Comments? 11:04, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him up a bit. Skt Like a baws  12:34, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make his earpink match the elder's more and make it bigger. 19:39, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:28, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 13:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:49, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad. Skt Like a baws  13:28, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:17, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Snaketooth (W) - Redone
Sorry for not putting this up earlier! Original artist was Mousetalon, and the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 20:05, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oh gawd this is wonderful. <3 Define the shading. *steals* ;3 05:03, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ;). 17:28, June 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * O Georgious. Define the shading a bit more and possibly the earpink. 09:54, 04, 06, 2012

Reuploaded 02:12, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (D) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading, as it was blotchy. OA was Bramble and a tweak by Leaf-storm. Comments? 07:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:14, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to remove the shading at the base of the tail and put some more on the end? It doesn't really make sense to me. Skt Like a baws  22:41, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded :3 07:13, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his lower back, Looks good! -- 04:16, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base-tail shading, it's darker than the rest. :3 09:11, 06, 06, 2012

Sharpclaw (Ki) - tweak
- because the muzzle is darker and looks gray rather than lighter ginger. 00:32, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around his head. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:34, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten his chest, too. 09:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a bit to match the other images? 13:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Should it be blurred more, the stripes will disappear. 14:25, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink on our right a bit. 18:28, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 00:44, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (W) - Redone
It was redone because it wasn't an actual dappled tortoiseshell. Comments? 16:27, June 3, 2012 (U

Define the yellow parts more so it matches the elder. 18:11, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the other parts as well, and smudge the patches more to match the elder. 99.111.198.23 18:51, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, that was me. >.<  18:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, and enlarge and blur the earpink~ Skt Like a baws  21:20, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

If you'd like, I can give you a color palette of what I used for the elder. Breeze whisker  00:46, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Breezy, can you? 23:26, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) - Tweaked
Shading needed defininging. owo OA was Scarlet owo. 19:44, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad?

Define the highlights; she looks like she just got darker. 01:21, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 00:43, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

While we're at it, smudge the patches more and make them more reddish. 09:19, 06, 06, 2012

The colors match the warrior, I'd say (it's probably the lighting that's making it seem like they don't). However, yes, DJ's right; they //do// need to be smudged. Not a whole lot, but, just so it matches a little better.

Dappletail (A) - Redone
OA was Wildy, she needed to be actually dappled. I'm sorry Icefrost (I think?), I know this doesn't match the warrior but this was difficult enough as it was to do :S Breeze sent me the direct colors so they're directly off her elder. I wouldn't be surprised if I need to fix a lot of stuff tbh  01:40, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't mind trying to recreate your pattern :p 23:26, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the patterns some more. Skt Like a baws  12:15, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Petalfur (W) ~ Tweaked
I swear this is tweaked. OA was Rainey. Comments? 00:09 Tue Jun 5

Blur the shading a bit. 19:34, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sunstar (L) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to be defined.. Changes not showing :U  01:33, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 19:13, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading. 22:10, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchfur (A) ~ Tweaked
Since I had the .xcf file, I also redid the image. The shading seemed odd, and the image needed to match the warrior more. Comments? 03:36, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Scorshfur? xD Blur the shading~ Skt Like a baws  03:47, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (W) ~ Tweaked
Heh. Fail. Needed to be shaggy. Comments? 15:31, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it more go with the direction of the fur and be less cluttered? Not to be mean, but this gives me the impression that he's not groomed and has mange. One thing you could do is make is furry around the back of his neck, a good example is a Maine Coon because I consider them shaggy and they have that  16:04, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mmm agreed, and maybe lessen the furryness a bit. He's shaggy, not quite messy. 19:45, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sunstar (D) - Tweaked
Defined the shading to make it more visable. OA's were Wildy and Frostheart, with a minor tweak by Ibly. Comments? 09:41, 06, 06, 2012

Cloudpelt (w) tweaked
Right, this is my first time tweaking :3 His shading needed to be redone, and I also made his earpink more like his deputy's, hope he looks good! 18:27, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you get rid of the black border? Or is that just how it uploaded.-- 18:34, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and define the ear pink.

Blur the shading too. 21:33, June 6, 2012 (UTC)