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Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more 18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please 01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs 21:32, 5/15/2017

Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more 00:56, 5/17/2017

Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

What means tad? – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

tad means a little bit.

Do I have to do something with legs? – 07:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

All you have to do is smooth the shading more over the whole image, and define the speckles a little bit in the shading 13:55, 5/18/2017

Reupload – 08:56, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin out the shading on her stomach a little? After that I think it'll be good to go. If I wasn't very specific, you can just say that. Basically what I meant is like the shading up from the haunch. 20:20, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken the speckles even more? Also if you're American you might be forgiven for not knowing tad, it's chiefly british --

I am russian ::::\ – 13:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

I noticed no one ever answered your question about shading depth and I still think it could be defined so here's an image of one of the apprentice tutorials, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:BCPrincess73.tutorial.png, which mentions shading depth so I hope that helps you

Reupload Would you like some vanilla ice cream with chocolate chips? – 10:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

It looks white, and less creamy white 19:39, 5/22/2017

Smooth out the body shading

Reupload – 08:21, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The shading could be smoothed more. 13:30, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

i dunno XXXX| – 15:45, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible or define it a bit more? It's hard to see it on my screen. Unless others see it just fine on their screens. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 02:37, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

I do think it wouldn't hurt to smooth just the neck shading. 20:17, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Are you really sure? – 06:55, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

well people dont generally just say things for the sake of it so yeah they're sure lol. anyway to fix the problem just ligten it by like 10% or smth then gaussian blur if ur lazy and patch up the leaking areas. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:13, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload What means "patch up the leaking areas" – 15:49, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the earpink a little not more? I'm still having trouble visualizing it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 18:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the neck shading again and also smooth out the tail-tip shading? And also, to answer, patching up leaking areas is referring to the shading-away-from-the-lineart leakage that sometimes happen when gaussian blurring, so yeah.^^

Smooth out the shading on the hips and shoulder/chest a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:32, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 13:42, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink more? 15:26, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit, it looks kinda dark to me. --  Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  04:28,5/28/2017

After you define the earpink, smudge it a bit? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 00:11, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

I am still working – 15:56, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload

Smooth out the shading on the tail tip and the neck area

to save you some time from other ppl commenting tbh just smooth out all of the shading in general   Life actually sucks 24/7   so    lol 11:49, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Still

Reupload – 11:12, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink

You've been asked to define the ear pink multiple times and to save you some trouble of getting asked even more, just darken it a few shades.

Reupload – 08:47, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Declined due to the one month limit <span style="">12:57, 6/09/2017

to be honest, this image went 2 days without comments. i don't think its fair to just decline it when no one commented.

It wasn't declined because of that, it was declined because images can't stay up for approval for more than 1 month, because it takes up space and such. The rule is there for a reason. <span style="">20:14, 6/09/2017

Broken, it seems like you're talking down on Fox. Knock it off; you're not a lead, and Fox used to be one, I'm pretty sure she knows the rules. Anyways, she has an extremely valid point and Shine will be given the extra two days.

Can you define the earpink again? Sorry but I still can't see it very well.

Define shading depth? 23:41, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, my God. How long must I wait? I'm not going to run around here. – 10:04, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 11:13, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

I have nothing really to say except that youre being a bit rude :/, look on the bright side your image wasn't declined Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:04, June 11, 2017 (UTC)chat

Daisytoe (A) ~ For Approval
Disneytoe's my last image before I become a warrior! Go go go! --

Good job Neon! Maybe define the eye depth, unless there is some already. Cosmokitten (talk) 10:18, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Decided that even though there was depth that it needed some definition. Fixed. --

Define the shading a bit? I like this, good job! Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:55, May 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smooth/smudge the shading on the top of the hindleg closest to us and the base of the tail. 13:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit, it looks flat. 19:35, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like all the shading could be smoothed out tbh <span style="">19:48, 5/19/2017

I believe the mickey mouse head on the chest is facing the wrong way. On the warrior and kit image, the head is facing sideways. This has it facing right side up. The patch on the back should be further up the back near the shoulders and the ears on the mickey head on the haunch need to be smaller. There should also be a tiny patch of gray on the furthest back paw. And I feel like all of the gray could be a tiny bit softer. 20:07, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Define shading depth more. 00:12, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

How's this? It turned out I errored when re-uploading, so my first re-upload was the same image as the first. --

Maybe desaturate the purple? I had the same problem, don't worry, but it seems too light/colorful. Maybe darken in a few ticks? And smooth it out? <span style="">15:47, 5/20/2017

Re-ups --

The shading could be smoothed out on the belly, and > half of the cat overall

Define the shading, the shading depth, define the eye depth, smooth the ear pink. 14:46, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail. <span style="">19:37, 5/22/2017

Still working?

Re-ups sure i am --

I don't think it reuploaded correctly - It looks like the same image as the one before. 09:37, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

On the mickey mouse head on the haunch, the ears need to be smaller in comparison to the "head" circle. 15:24, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the upper back, it all looks a bit hard-edged. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:39, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Smooth the shading a little bit more. 02:46, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth

Re-ups tfw you're ready to re-up but then you see "define depth" --

Define the shading a little? 13:07, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

The tail shading is leaking I'm pretty sure, and the shading all over the image could be defined a bit more. The shading depth too <span style="">09:46, 6/02/2017

Re-ups *takes bite of snackoo* I feel like it's lighter on a PNG than it looks like on GIMP. Can you redline it, Broken?

Smooth shading and define shading depth

Re-ups no srsly broken get me your redline --

Smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us. 23:35, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

sharpen the mickeys a little - they seem more blurred/ less defined in shape than the other images

Kinda don't have a way to redline, but it should be near the tail tip and the middle of the tail is where the shading is leaking. Unless you fixed it up and I didn't see... <span style="">07:34, 6/08/2017

Smooth out shoulder shading as well as the shading on the upper part of the front leg closet to us. 23:43, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Blossom (W) - For Approval
I don't like how this turned out tbh. 20:00, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ginger-y patches this should have - they're supposed to be the color #c95a1e (a medium ginger), but I can't really them on here

It looks like there's something leaking on the rump right next to the tail line art 20:26, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:54, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the body, tail, and front leg closest to us. 22:12, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

You want the file? it'd be extremely helpful and i don't think this honestly matches that well...

Sure Fox, but what format would it be in? I use gimp. 22:56, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's mainly the pattern that's the issue. I'll fix the pattern once I get the file from Fox. 23:18, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

smooth out the neck shading.

Reuploaded I don't think there's much of a difference. 09:59, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible and smooth it out some more? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 13:01, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now it looks worse??? 17:06, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

if you're using GIMP, tick the hard edged option on the smudge tool, and try and smudge the white from there.

Also the ginger on her other images doesn't appear to be that bright

Reuploaded Well, it's getting better. 23:53, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

yep, looking good. i would smooth out the shading everywhere and smooth out the white a little

Reuploaded I feel like I smoothed the white out too much. (Although, smudging it instead of blurring it to smooth it out would be a better idea...) 01:45, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

The patches look more ,, roughly?? smudged on her other images

Reuploaded How's this??? 22:43, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

try and go for a softer look on the white and not show any of the smudge marks

Reuploaded I feel like I'm doing something wrong. 19:02, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Doesn't this have to match the rogue image? This looks like it's matching the es and that's a different pose than the warrior blank 20:08, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded reuploaded it then i realized i was on a different account... so oops 21:47, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

smooth out the neck shading a lot

Reuploaded 13:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the cat's rear and the shading on the back legs.

Smooth out the two black lines on the tail? This is nice. :3 23:45, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
She's back you guys. (Snowdapple said I could post this after it was archived so here ya go)

Near the tail diagonal almost from the very back patch, the shading's a little blotchy. 00:21, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading

smooth the shading.

re-up Why won't you smooth out????

There's a little bit of leaking shading where the body meets the tail. 01:22, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

you think you could remove some of the white dots in the pupil? it makes it hard to see

re-up There's no leaking shading, it's probably just the texture.

No, look at the area I circled in red. The patch of shading I was trying to point out to you doesn't touch the lineart at all and also looks kind of hard edged. If it's texture, you should probably smooth it out there or whatnot because the shading really does appear to be leaking. 20:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Eh, not too happy.

its not like ivy's suggestion damaged ur image lol. just had to point that out. Life actually sucks 24/7  so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:50, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the brown patch on the > front leg could be a little bigger, as it seems to cover more length on the apprentice

re-up Redid the texture because I didn't like it.

Beautiful! Maybe define the texture just a tiny bit? Good job! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:57, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you add a tiny bit of shading on <- ear?

Prehaps define the tail shading better <span style="">21:26, 6/06/2017

re-up Thanks Cosmo!

Define the facial shading better. <span style="">01:53, 6/09/2017

Define the shading depth. 01:57, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

re-up may lighten shading

Define the earpink 12:45, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out and/or lighten the shading a little? 12:51, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Let me know if it needs smoothing.

The shading depth could at least be smoothed out a little. Great job! This is really pretty. 01:12, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Thanks Shy!

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the face and tail. Looks nice!

Sweetbriar (W) - For Approval
<span style="">16:26 Wed May 31

These stripes are a bit too sharp. I know you probably did it the same way on the kit, and the StarClan is the same way, but this really should be smudged a fair bit more.

Reuploaded Also made the muzzle shading look less like a stripe. <span style="">23:56 Wed May 31

Define the shading depth on the main body

Smoothen out the white chest. 22:23, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

tbh i think the chest is fine cuz its the same style as her other images   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 11:41, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

I know you're the OA of the kit, but are you sure the white should cover the entire chest like that? It seems like it only covers a little bit of the chest on the kit, queen and star. Also, I agree the white could be softened just a bit <span style="">23:40, 6/03/2017

Still working?

Reuploaded I was visiting a friend from college for a while. <span style="">18:14 Tue Jun 6

This is pretty. Smooth the shading on the tail tip, seems pretty hard-edged. <span style="">04:06, 6/08/2017

There's a really dark stripe on the neck, if it's a stripe, leave it alone, if it's shading, smooth it out

Deerpaw (TC) (K) ~ CBA
kitty. This matches the apprentice, and I also think the only place the white speckles would show is the belly, since the rest are on the back/top of the haunch and such on the other images

Gonna get shot for this, but I think the white would be visible on the sides. Why would it only be visible on the stomach without seeing the flanks? The apprentice's white dots are visible on the stomach and sides, so I think it would be visible from this angle too. <span style="">21:51, 6/05/2017

Agreed ^^ Smooth out the shading on the <--- leg?

I agree with Broken. Smooth out the shading on the tail a little bit. 23:32, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded No, the white doesn't show on both sides of this blank. < side of the cat only shows the chest and that goes into the leg - and the chest clearly doesn't have spots on the apprentice, as it's not specified in the description. I added a few speckles on the very far > side, but this blank really doesn't have a haunch, persay, and the specific way I chose to put the apprentice's spots on the belly and sides (which in essence, I only made them stretch to the top of the back from the belly, and arch over the haunch), I can't put them where you're suggesting because it'd be a contradiction to the placement of the apprentice. They don't go onto anywhere but the top of the haunch, along the back, and because this is such a small blank, it doesn't have that.

I still feel like the white dots should wrap around the side. <span style="">18:55, 6/06/2017

Can you explain anatomically how that makes sense? As seen on other kit images (Beetlewhisker, Blossomfall, Benny, Fleck, etc.) there is only coloring up alongside to wrap all the way around when there is white covering the haunch. The haunch on the apprentice is this area, and so that's why I added a few light speckles on the very --> side of the image, because those could show.. However, in that red are I've circled, which is also the haunch - has no speckles at all. If I add the speckles to wrap all the way around the side, I'd be adding them onto the kit's haunch. Those other images show that that area's the haunch, not just the side, even though the blank is tiny and could perhaps appear that way. I want a another opinion explaining how that makes sense, because I can't see it, because to me no spots on the apprentice haunch = no spots on the kit haunch because of matching images.

I think that what Broken means is that the dots go up further along the -> side, almost reaching the neck, but not going on the haunch. 20:16, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded See thing is, there aren't spots on the neck of the other image, so can't go all the way up there, nor are there spots on the shoulder or behind the shoulder, so it can't go all the way up the side because the apprentice doesn't show that.

I think its fine maybe define the shading on the farthest (paw??) -->Rainbowmistake (talk) 15:55, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

Maybe smooth the shading a small bit <span style="">19:58, 6/07/2017

Reuploaded

CBA? 13:01, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Mouse Ear (W) ~ CBA
mirror mirror on the wall who has the smallest ears of them all 22:36, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smallear does. Maybe smooth out the shading on the belly a little bit and/or the tail? May just be my screen lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 22:55, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit. 23:39, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:10, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste on the <--- side of tail. It's a single speck, and since I'm on mobile, I don't have a way to redline as far as I'm concerned. <span style="">07:38, 6/08/2017

reuploaded 06:24, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

No, it's still there. http://vvcap.com/7TTc5Saig9v <span style="">20:15, 6/09/2017

reuploaded :/ 20:28, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 13:02, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Comments? 17:09, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and blur the stripes a little more. They look softer on his other images. 17:48, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:00, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there are more stripes on the ancient and sharpclaw. Also, smooth the shading some more everywhere. <span style="">18:52, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Okay, I added a tail stripe and a haunch stripe, but if this needs more stripes still then I'll add more. :P 19:18, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I really think you should add stripes at least to the tail. There are 13 stripes (I think I counted right) on the tails of both of the other images, whereas this only has eight, which is significantly less. 20:14, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes look blotchy, and the shading, I can't tell the difference. Did ya smooth it? <span style="">21:35, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Well, I sure did try! :) 21:47, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The face stripes don't appear to match the other images

Reuploaded I'm going off of the ancient image. 22:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say that the sharpclaw image is first in the set. 22:54, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah. You gotta match both of 'em Shy. Also, well done on the approved images of yours. I'm genuinely proud of you on your progress. <span style="">22:56, 6/06/2017

Perhaps you could give some shape to the haunch shading? Also, the shading seems to be leaking in some places. 18:40, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you so much, Broken! 19:38, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add more stripes to his --> leg or haunch thing? And his like shoulder chest area? It has more on his other images Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded 21:08, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the line art in a few places all around the image.

Can you please redline them? 01:42, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I mean, it's sorta,,, everywhere

Reuploaded 17:56, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the hard-edged lines in the earpink, and smooth out all the shading all over the image, it doesn't look different then the other uploads where I've told you to smooth it out <span style="">19:33, 6/08/2017

Reuploaded 20:11, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

For the stripes on the tail, especially the part closest to the body, can you make them reach the lineart? Some of them seem to just stop a little before the lineart. For the stripes on the main body, can you make them taper a bit? 16:19, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:20, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the stripes. 18:13, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little and smooth out that bit of shading on the back

Reuploaded 19:34, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Pricklekit (RC) (Ki) - CBA
howdy folks

I think there's more stripes in the little brown patches. Cute <span style="">21:33, 6/06/2017

The ends of the patches look softer on the star. 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

reups I really need to do a charart that's not a kit, warrior, or star. Call me unoriginal™

reups fixed some things that bothered me

Maybe define the head shading a smidge? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:40, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

reups

I know I'm probably just being nitpicky, but the head looks more purple then the rest of the image. The shading on <-- side of head looks slightly more purple, to not confuse you. <span style="">19:56, 6/07/2017

reups Dunno how that managed to happen.

I think there's some waste on > back paw, if I'm not mistaken. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:20, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

It appears you are, in fact, mistaken. :P

No, I've looked closely, and it kinda does look like there's waste. Maybe check your shading layer? <span style="">04:05, 6/08/2017

Broken, I have checked every single pixel within a 5 mile radius of said paw. :P There is n o t h i n g there. (Except for blank pixels)

I can see it too... 04:23, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

reups I see literally nothing but I erased around the paw anyways so hopefully this mysterious waste is gone. Found waste between the front legs though.

It's gone now! :) 04:44, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Must've been my horrible eyesight, seeing things that aren't even there. <span style="">19:31, 6/08/2017

Nah, it was probably my disgusting monitor and bad eyesight.

Comments before approval? 23:06, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Smooth shading near the rear?(No rhyme intended! :P) 21:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad, and define the light on <-- paw. Also, I belive there is leaking shading on --> back paw, and eye color leaking outside the lineart. <span style="">21:39, 6/06/2017

Reups Thanks Shypaw! And broken, the front paw you're talking about isn't supposed to have any light on it. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, maybe add some shading to the <--- ear (just a tad) and darken the nose colour? 22:15, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there is any nose color, and if there is, define it a bit <span style="">22:33, 6/06/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the front paw farthest from us. Also, lighten the shading a little bit? 22:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused with your shading placement. The shading on the tail, back, and chest/neck area indicate that the light is coming from <--- (from the right/behind the cat) while the legs, haunches, and head indicate that the light is coming from the ---> (from the left/in front of the cat). I believe you're going to have to switch one of these in order for it to make sense. 23:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I switched around the shading. Is it better now? --ErmineGlow (talk) 13:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading around the belly and definitely the face shading need to be swapped now. Also, define the light on the closest hind paw.

Vec said that if I only switched on of the shading parts around, I would be good. I switched around the legs and haunches, so I don't think I need to swap the chest/belly and face shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I made a mistake (mostly because I was super tired when I wrote that, but that's not important); the head shading needs to be swapped (covering more of the <--- face with the light coming from the <---). Don't only just take my word. That's why there are other people here. I'm bound to make mistakes (like I just did). Danny's got a good eye for critiques. As for the belly shading, I personally think it's optional (artist's choice) for this shading perspective. If you're keeping it, I think it should be swapped so it hugs the foreleg instead of the hind leg. Or you could make it just emcompass the lower part of the belly. 23:28, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

The shading's leaking a little bit on the lower chest and the haunch, and I think the earpink might be layered over the lineart in ---> ear? 22:35, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on his back and some in the upper left corner of the image. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 13:34, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and the closest back leg/paw

There's some waste on the back and above the head. 19:04, June 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Opps, I didn't mean leaking, what I meant was waste! Lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 19:11, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There is still some shading leaking on the back leg closest to us. 13:00, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:21, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's leaking shading almost everywhere, see here http://vvcap.com/sJTZiQGhuRX <span style="">09:38, 6/11/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:37, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define <--- earpink. 18:15, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Cloudrunner (Star) - CBA
20:32, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

The tail shading looks blotchy near the tip <span style="">20:48, 6/07/2017

I think the eyes would be more blue, they look grey to me. 21:20, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I saturated the blue a little bit, but not much since I did colorpick off the warrior's eyes, but maybe I didn't get the right colors? Branchwing, since you were the one who changed warrior's eye color, could you tell me which hex codes you used? 23:54, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed the eye color based on the codes I got from Branchwing. I have no idea why the colors I got from the eye were so grey. 00:23, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit? Also, I think Wikia's image displaying might have something to do with that; I've noticed that some colors do appear a bit more gray than they should.

Re-uploaded. 12:42, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Is the <-- ear supposed to be dark gray like that, or is that shading? <span style="">19:26, 6/08/2017

Re-uploaded. It was shading, so I just lightened/reduced it a little. 22:30, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Dew (W) ~ For Approval
I'm very proud of this!! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 00:21, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

You should be! This is fantastic! Smooth tail shading a tad? 00:42, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks! Also, lightened the shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 00:51, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups. Messed with shading opacity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 00:56, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I know there's limited space, but define the shading on both the farthest paws/legs? And smooth the shading a little on the closest front leg. This looks really good!

oo pretty! i wish i could do texture like that :0 anyways, you mind lightening the shading while you're at it?

Re-uploaded. I tried lightening it lower, but it would ruin the look of how I want it as shading. My computer has a different sense of screen apart from others. It sees differently. When the shading is darker on my phone, it's lighter on my computer. It's super weird, lol. And thanks!! I hope you can see it being lightened. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:40, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back paw furthest from us and the front paw furthest from us. Appears to be leaking, so prehaps define it only a little <span style="">19:28, 6/08/2017

Re-uploaded.<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 22:49, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Slatefur (App) ~ For Approval
Tried new shading, sharp (even though the texture makes it look much sharper btw) and smudged. I like it. 01:16, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Needs to be long haired. Nice <span style="">01:24 Thu Jun 8

Heck, I don't know how to do that, so I guess I will withdraw it. Man I have bad luck with my chararts :p 01:28, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I'll take over. 19:44, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:48, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

The texture looks strange; around the eyes, it looks like he has circles around his eyes because the texture abruptly cuts off. Maybe give it some more shape/flow all over the image. On the haunch it looks just like scattered lines. <span style="">19:53, 6/08/2017

Reuploaded. Redid the texture. Also, edited the shading a bit. I like this better. 20:10, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

It's probably just my phone screen, but there appears to be green around the eyes where it shouldn't be. Also smooth the shading on the base of the tail (rear?) 23:57, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

The image seems too dark to match the kit. 00:04, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth and smooth the shading on the face :) 14:00, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:12, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Apple Blossom (W) - For Approval
dont comment on the stripes or the shading; I know it needs to be tweaked, but I'm sick as a dog right now and I just wanted to post it. also don't tell me to match the ES; that image isn't being used.

I think the white goes around the eyes

It does look like that, yes, but that's because of how I smudged it on the kit. I can tweak it later if it's really that big of an issue.

Don't shoot me, but define the light a smidge on the front paw closest to us. <span style="">07:32, 6/08/2017

Re-uploaded. Broken, I did say not to comment on the shading. I would appreciate it if you actually read what I said. I was already aware of the issues regarding it, and I didn't need the extra comment.

Well sorry. Anyways, the shading on the front paw furthest from us looks like its leaking a bit <span style="">19:22, 6/08/2017

I can't see it; mind giving me something to make it stand out?

http://vvcap.com/CrAKqQAOSTW <span style="">07:29, 6/09/2017

Thrushwing (A) - For Approval
Colors from her other images. The shading looks kinda crazy so I'll fix that.

Prehaps define the patten beneath the shading Patch, I can't make it out too well <span style="">19:24, 6/08/2017

Re-uploaded Redid the shading. Did that help with the pattern? 23:14, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell if that flank brown is shading or part of the pattern. <span style="">03:01, 6/09/2017

That's part of the pattern. I only put shading on the belly (near the chest) and behind the leg, so only a little part of the brown is in shading. 13:55, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Slatefur (Ro) ~ For Approval
Aaaaaaaaah! I'm so happy with this! I used the shading style from my other Slatefur attempt, messy and sharp. I like how it looks so I might use it more often. 23:17, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Good job! Define the earpink and smooth the shading on the tail around the tip a little bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 23:46, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste on the back leg closest to us. The texture is awesome. ^-^ 23:56, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! I thought it looked bad, but... 01:55, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Don't forget your signature. :) 00:30, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

This seems a tad too dark to match the kit. <span style="">00:43, 6/09/2017

Don't think the texture matches that well to the kit.

Reuploaded Sorry! 01:55, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Looks like there's some waste underneath the front paw closest to us. This is really good! 05:07, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups thanks! 13:59, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste right in front of the hind paw farthest from us. 23:47, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

hey this is really nice :] so could you maybe darken/define the shading on the hindleg to match the darkness of the shading on the other parts of the image, and flip the tail shading upside down to match the light source? (for the last one i could be wrong lmao so dont change it if you think its right)   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 01:51, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups You didn't specify which hindleg so I assumed the closer one and defined that one. I didn't swap the tail shading as I thought it would be on the top. The shading is basically coming from the left and it followed the pattern of the shading/the placement. If anyone else thinks so, I can probably swap it. 07:19, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

i meant the haunch lmao. either way, i think it looks ok now. Life actually sucks 24/7  so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 02:04, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Acorntail (W) ~ For Approval
sigh school's over. just an image to start off the summer hh

i screwed up and named this acornfur, if someone can rename this i'll appreciate it a lot

Maybe just reupload over Acorntail's warrior file and change it; I have no clue, I've been awake the whole night and can't think properly. Anyways, prehaps ask Patch for the deputy or apprentice, the stripe pattern doesn't seem to match. <span style="">09:56, 6/10/2017

Re-uploaded I'll just wait for an admin to come and rename it

Renamed.

This is beautiful ^^ The stripes on the top of his hindleg are more a circular looking (if that makes sense) I still have the apprentice file if you need it. 12:23, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sure. just send it to thefoxgirl15@yahoo.com. Thanks!