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Oatwhisker (TC) (W) - For Approval
— Imp uri ti  e s   ★  19:41, August 26, 2019 (UTC) There is some waster at the bottom of the tail where it twists --Moo (talk) 19:53, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

oops re-uploaded  — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  19:54, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture. The og warrior does not have any. The ear pink also looks brighter too on the other image. The shading on the haunch can also be smoothed and curved more (see something like this or this for examples on that curve). 20:01, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  20:33, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! Could you define the shading depth a bit? That's just adding a thinner, darker layer of shading. Also, add some shading to the back paw (it would be entirely in shadow with this source). -- 22:38, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  23:37, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

The back paw farthest from us should have shading. Shading is also leaking away from the lineart on the legs. -- 23:42, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  23:46, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

What happened to the back paw? It doesn't appear to be filled in anymore. -- 01:01, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

can you send me a screenshot of which you're referring to ? to me it looks like the shading completely covers it. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  02:19, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded, fixed some of the shading again. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  02:58, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

I gotcha. Here's a redline for a bunch of stuff. Potato's referring to the back leg furthest from us (see in red). Green is leaking shading (so fill that in); pink is where I would add shading; blue is where the shading is too overblurred/flat so erase the shading there. 03:00, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

aa thank you-- hadn't realized that was a back leg oop- anyway, re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  03:09, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Change "For Evaluation" to "For Approval.  05:15, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Only leads are allowed to change the heading, and only they are allowed to determine if an image/skill of the artist can be bumped up to an apprentice. Regardless, I will bump you up to an apprentice since you seem to have the basics down ^^ 14:24, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Snow had already promoted her to an apprentice. 17:01, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on both ears, there is also leaking shading between the haunch and back leg. -- 22:43, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  00:43, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

At the bottom back foot on the far side its light where I'm pretty sure there should be sharing. This might be a shading leak Moo (talk) 05:53, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a bit on the haunch? 19:10, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light to the front paw closest to us - with this source, it should be in the light like the other one

Still working? 23:34, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) - Declined
this honestly looks horrid and im half asleep but i tried — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  04:02, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Change the "For Approval" to "For Evaluation". 04:46, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

It can stay at “For Approval”, I’ll go promote them. this is more than enough to be promoted. ​​​​​

The patches on the queen are larger and more smudged, I can provide a redline later tonight. 14:31, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

ahh it seems i didn't save the layers so i'll have to redo the whole thing anyway. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  16:35, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  16:57, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be more black on the chest? You're doing a great job so far! -- 22:42, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

'''re-uploaded.  — Imp uri ti  e s'''   ★  23:09, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading leaking at the <--- curve of the tail, along the <-- front leg and within the ---> ear. Could you also expand the shading on the shoulder and neck (specifically the black part of the neck), and the bottom of the haunch. I also think the shading depth could also be defined overall. ^^ 00:20, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded.  — Imp uri ti  e s'''   ★  00:29, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

My comments about the leaking shading on the <-- foreleg and adding shading to the top of the shoulder (the black part) still stands. 14:54, August 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere - I can barely see it. -- I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 06:14, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

There's a little waste in between the paws (the place where all the paws meet) and the tail bend, near where the tail touches the ground. -- 16:21, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 23:34, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Mudfur (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. -- 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad? ​​​​​

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry 01:34, 8/30/2019

Reed Tail (W) ~ For Approval
i'll fix the stripes later, just realized they don't look the same as the other images

I see some waste along the tail, near the bend and where it touches the ground. -- 16:28, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

Also smooth out the shading on the face --Moo (talk) 21:03, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up Can the both of you point out where you're talking about? im a bit confused

There's also a thin line of waste underneath the tail. 23:35, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

re-up

Featherpelt (K) - For Approval
Let's give a tabby a shot rip Moo (talk) 02:32, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define/expand the shading and smudge the stripes more. -- 02:33, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:43, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

the shading on her face seems a lil flat. 05:09, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I have no idea how to fix flat shading but I tried and also fixed some leaking Moo (talk) 08:44, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

A kinda easy way is to add another layer of shading that covers only a small area of the first layer of shading to create a sense of depth (kinda like on Doestar's kit)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 07:13, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the stripe on the very tail tip; just seems thicker than the other images. The stripes on the haunch also seem a touch to sharp; looks great though

Sasha (W) - For Approval
i hate this. it's horrible as heck. 05:42, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you remove the shading over the eyes, Smudge the tail a bit more smoothly, and lighten the shading? Thanks! Moo (talk) 08:35, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it, too. -- 15:08, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:40, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the shading depth on the front legs, and smooth the shading more. -- 17:46, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:57, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading, and erase it on the eye. -- 18:59, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

And can you smudge the earpink and brown a bit more? Moo (talk) 21:20, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. gimme a sec, and the eye shading will be gone. 06:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

'''look at them eyes. reuploaded. 06:27, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading more --Moo (talk) 04:23, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:31, September 3, 2019 (UTC)'''

The base colour looks too "cool" compared to her other images; maybe try #C59A70 for the base? Or even giving the shading a red tint, though that is completely artist's choice

'''reuploaded. tell me if should change the shading tint. 00:14, September 4, 2019 (UTC)'''

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. -- 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^

Tempest (Q) - CBA
hi ​​​​​

CBA? 04:20, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Briarlight (Star) - For Approval
First ever StarClan cat. And I'm glad she can run free like she always dreamed of. -- 00:28, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading on the forelegs would be switched if the light source is going ---> 01:40, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:04, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sunrise (Ro) ~ For Approval
All colors except the eyes and the pale belly came directly from Tree's images. Comments? 00:29, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

She needs to be long-furred, new cite for that was found.

02:08, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:30, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly smudge the paler parts just a tiny bit?

Reuploaded. 17:30, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Flurry (Ro) ~ CBA
FLURRY

CBA? 04:21, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Flickerkit (Kit) ~ CBA
he was super cute in the book

01:08, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Cute CBA? 04:21, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Moonlight (Q) - CBA
my first time being an OA....i imagine her as some kind of blue himalayan due to kittypet ancestry 01:13, September 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 04:22, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Flickerkit (Star) ~ CBA
i know nothing about him but no one hurt me or my son he's too precious 02:12, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Shaded Moss (K) ~ CBA


CBA? 04:23, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) ~ For Approval


There's a line of waste underneath the tail. -- 03:08, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Swankit (K) - CBA
another baeby

CBA?

Snailpaw (K) ~ CBA
I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 09:14, September 3 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Larksong (SS) (Star) ~ CBA
RIP I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 10:26, September 3 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sasha (K) - For Approval
My favorite part about this one: Making the collar. -- 23:16, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Both ears are supposed to be brown, I think. 00:35, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

I believe this only affects the outer part of the ear, not the inner? Just in case, could I get a second opinion on that? -- 00:37, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

eh I think the inner ear would matter too

I also think the collar tag would be on the other side; right now it looks like it's not abiding by the laws of gravity. Or it's stuck upright or something. 15:34, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:16, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Stonefur (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Was going to do the kit alt, but realized that the only description mistake he had listed was from when he was a warrior. Comments? 04:26, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink Moo (talk) 20:32, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:35, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sootfur (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:26, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Softpelt (K) - For Approval
Here I think the shading needs smoothing but I wanna get this in quickly so I remember Moo (talk) 05:47, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 06:10, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit too, while you're at it. ​​

Creek (Ro) - For Approval
21:40, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

I didn't realize he was a kit, will fix that later. 21:49, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Moon (SFH) (Ki) ~ for evaluation
This is the best Charart I ever did!Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:53, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Remember to not thumb your images. This needs to be uploaded as Moon.kit.png so it works with wiki templates. And define the shading a lot, since it's hardly visible right now. -- 23:58, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

OkBluedragon64 (talk) 00:00, September 5, 2019 (UTC)