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Icecloud (W) ~ Redone
The shagding was poor and the ear-pink was to dark for a white cat. The OA was either Cloudy or Icecloud. I got permission to redo this from Ivy in chat a couple minutes ago by the way. Comments for improvement? 19:41, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and thicken out the shading on the haunch. Define the ear-pink and blur it. 23:10 Wed Jan 11

I'm not a fan of the earpink. Make it darker and redder. Breeze whisker  01:17, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:22, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I forgot some waste between the legs. Fixed that. 19:33, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:55, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the tail 'highlight' curve with the tail more, and if she has shading on the back of her head and ears area, darken it to match the rest of the shading. Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  05:37, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:48, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

To me the shading looks kind of dark and unblurred. Do that as well as blur the earpink a little more. 18:49, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 22:33 Sat Jan 14

Re-uploaded. Fail. 00:03, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  04:37, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little, too. x3 05:20, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Still a fail with blurring the shading. 22:18, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lolol blur and lighten it more c: 22:23, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. 05:16, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Than blur it more. 18:10 Mon Jan 16

Make her an off-white. The color she is is white, and it shouldn't be. 19:30, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

It's not, and i'm withdrawing this. It is starting to get on my nerve, the shading. 19:35, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 21:44, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:55, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Based on the shading, I think the unshaded part of the tail should be on the other side of the tail. ^^ Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:59, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

The light was coming slightly from the top-right, so I won't change it, unless someone else says otherwise. 18:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading or the entire image, it looks pale gray. -- Elo legs 19:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Then perhaps extend the light part to cover more of the tail? Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:30, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:39, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:47, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

And the shading. I agree that the unshaded part of the tail should be on the other side of the tail. 06:01 Thu Jan 19

Darken the earpink a tad, blur the shading, and maybe lighten it a bit?  Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:24, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not the biggest fan of this image... 18:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little more. 23:53, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) ~ Redone
Eh. Comments? 02:10, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job! The tail shading looks a a little flat though. 18:40, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Shelly, but where is your light source? I can't see one right now... 02:04 Mon Jan 16

Above. 02:49, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, then add a small line of shading to the crease where the haunch meets the belly, add a highlight to the tail, and darken the shading on the bottom of the belly, the chest, and the neck. 02:53 Mon Jan 16

Should there be earpink on both ears? 15:29, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

If I interpret the ears as both facing the viewer, yeah. I'll reupload later today. 15:36, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:19, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks flat to me, but it's hard to explain how you should fix it... 00:49, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

No offense, Shelly, but I think it's the light source. As it is, the light is in a weird spot so it wouldn't put shadows where you would expect shadows to be, and that kinda makes it look flat. 05:57 Thu Jan 19

Mmmhhmm. Maybe try a different light source? Or make the shading curve to the body a bit better. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:22, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Went with a frontal light source. Sorry it took a few days. Been busy. 21:32, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Foxwhisker (W)~ Redone


The stripes had been bothering me for a while, and im the OA of the current image so it was easy to tweak. I also blurred the shading a bit. 21:32, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

O I love this! Blur the stripes. 21:35, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 02:46, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little bit more. I luff this<3 05:37, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Since I'm pretty sure Icy isn't gonna do anymore of her images since she left, and Firestar's already taken over, I'm gonna go ahead and decline this. Anyone can take over. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale  Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  15:47, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over, just gotta upload in a sec..Hold on 22:08, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded - Okay, I was too lazy to redo this. And I got the earpink from Foxheart's .pxd file, so I thought it would be fine since they both look alike to me. Bah. 22:18, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur zee shading Blob (: <span style="">01:01 Fri Jan 20

Bluestar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be more blue-grey. OA= Mumble785 with tweaks by Minstarr and Snowdazzle. 23:17, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

The tear should be on the other ear, me thinks. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 23:26, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I copied it from the past image. Let me check. 23:27, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Well it's in the other ear on her leader image now. Could you make the color a bit lighter to match that one? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:13, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Take the color from the haunch of Stormtail 00:24, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 13:52, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Upoaded. 00:05, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten and redden the ear-pink and define and darken the shading. 04:08, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? 17:29, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 20:00, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the haunch shading. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 20:16, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. 21:49, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

The tear in the ear should go more in a sideways direction, and the colour or shading or whatever looks darker than the leader one. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 22:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Ear fail Dx 18:50, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's miscolored lineart on the eyes. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  16:12, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Try to make parts of the torn ear thinner than the others, if it's like that on the leader image. Also, enlarge and blur the earpink. 18:16, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.' Torn ears hate me. 23:05, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

The tail shading looks a bit flat. 00:12, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and define it. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:22, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Than blur it into the pelt more. <span style="">01:35 Wed Jan 18

Re-Uploaded. 01:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 18:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:35, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink pink, not purple. =3 Nice work. 02:15, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Add a highlights/lighter part to the tail. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:50, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Ear-pink fail T.T 21:26, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

It seems I stalk this image. :P Make it a bit more triangular and blur it a tad. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:33, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Me too Sky, me too. xD 22:44, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the cute lil' earpink :3 <span style="">01:04 Fri Jan 20

Wing (PH) - Redone
Okay... I have been simply dying to redo this. The gray was placed awkwardly so it looked like really weird shading. If anyone has any real vices with me redoing this, I can take it down and revert it. OA was Shadowedheart, with a tweak by Bramble, and then a redo by Moonflight and Cloudy. Comments? 05:43, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the grey a little. 16:13, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Explain to me what was wrong with this image. I do have a problem with you re-doing it. It needed to match her queen image, which it did. I have a major issue with this, because it was one of the quickest I'd ever completed, and I thought it was perfect. 20:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)


 * If you have problems with images that get proposed and accepted for tweak, take it up with the project leadership and spearhead a revamp of the process by which tweaks are proposed and given permission. Don't attack those redoing images. Instead find out why it was approved and discuss it with the person who approved the tweak. 22:07, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno... please, please don't get mad at me, but the placement of the grey on all of her images is a bit awkward. I can't tell is the grey on the bottom is shading or not just by looking. 21:56, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Now, Scarlet, could you please lighten the shading a bit? 21:59, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Why does the pattern have to be changed though? I have no problem with this being redone just fr say, better shading, or defining the patches, but personally I liked the old pattern. Can't you keep that and just define the patches or something? I don't wanna cause drama, I just liked the old patter. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  02:28, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. Cloudy would have given you the .xcf to touch it up. 02:35, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If everyone would like to keep the old version, I'm perfectly fine with that. I just say that Gorsetail's pattern had been redone and I figured that cats with the same pattern should be redone. And if Cloudy would like to tweak it, I'm fine with that to (she asked earlier). 04:07, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

But the pattern's not the same thing. Just look at the queen image. It only looks that way because the PH blanks are a little smaller and harder to work with. If you don't mind, I'll take over on it, as I do in fact have the .xcf file, and I'm working on it now. It's looking better, actually. 04:14, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Fine by me. 04:15, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tweaked the patches, lowered the opacity on the mud, and tweaked the eye, 'cause I thought the color was too plain. 16:43, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you remove the brown paws though? I never really understood why she had them. She's not mentioned with them as far as I know, and they have mud splotches, not mud covering their legs. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  20:45, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. And make the mud more splotchy so she looks like a gray and white cat with mud, not a gray and brown cat :P <span style="">02:09 Mon Jan 16

Personally, I think the streaks are fine. I can look at this image and clearly tell it's a gray and white cat. 20:28, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

At least burn the mud, then. It's too light. <span style="">03:39 Wed Jan 18

Not all mud is the same shade of brown, it looks fine. -- Elo legs   19:42, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you, Elo. Also, each artist has their own style, and honestly, I don't like copying other user's styles. 20:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, I know mud can be different colours and all, but the mud is only barely distinguishable from the pelt, and only 'cause I know it's supposed to be mud. <span style="">05:56 Thu Jan 19

Honestly, I agree with Wildy. If you didn't know it was mud, you'd think she was just a brown and white cat. also, can you lighten the white a bit? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:20, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Fine. Re-uploaded. Does that look better? >.> Seems nothing I do is good enough for you guys. It's freaking mud. It's supposed to blend in and make the white fur darker. Ever seen a cat covered in mud? xD 18:21, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the mud a tad more. I liked the mud better before xD. -- Elo legs 19:38, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I know, so did I. But, if I kept it like that, certain people would continue to ask me to change it, thus being counterproductive. Now, I'll tweak her queen version once I'm back home, since this connection is very hit-or-miss. 19:49, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

People will think what they think. Make the earpink a bit paler. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:29, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Splash (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Patches needed to be smudged, OA was Icethroat. 05:12, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the tail spots a bit more and maybe change the direction of the smudings to go with the fur; it kinda looks like his fur's growing up. xP 06:09, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like that Scarlet? 06:16, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Better. Can you make the front part of his belly patch smudge back towards his tail so that they go with the way his fur'd grow? Kinda like Yellowfang's old MC shading style. 06:21, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the highlights. 18:17, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the face highlight. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  15:56, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 16:31, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) - Tweaked
Was on the list for ear-pink and stripes, but I think the stripes look fine as they are, so I just smudged them a bit. OA was Icy. Comments? 06:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

(still doesn't like the stripes) Eh... define the earpink? 23:56, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:55, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

(I don't like the stripes either) dull the earpink a bit. <span style="">02:13 Tue Jan 17

Re-uploaded 03:08, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more (pretty please will you change the stripes?) <span style="">03:37 Wed Jan 18

Seriously, Scarlet. The stripes are bad. >.> And he only has one image, so it's not like redoing them would open upa bunch of images that would need to be redone to match. 14:24, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, Shelly's correct. If you want to re-do them, re-do them. Personally, I think y-tabbies look a little odd. 20:34, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:08, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make him a boy. XD And darken and redden the earpink. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Still looks like there's some extra pixels by the eye... <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  16:36, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:43, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit and make it paler. Wish I could do good tabbies >.> <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  19:36, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur (E) ~ Tweaked
OA was Willowpool16. Fixed shading and earpink and blurred lineart. No highlights. Comments? 17:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading. 18:05, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 00:11, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I'm not liking the shading. 01:49, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken teh shading some more :3 <span style="">02:11 Mon Jan 16

Define the neck shading if there is any. <span style="">01:39 Wed Jan 18

Brackenfur (W) - Redone
Hey guys, not sure if changes are showing, but either way, wee.. Here it is. xD I can darken it to match the apprentice image. But I used the ref link on the tweak page, so yeah. xD Comments? 17:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tis belongs on the tweak page, mon ami 8D 18:00, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Moved it. xD 18:01, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

There ya go xD Blut the scar. 18:04, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just a personal preference, but could you extend one of the cheek stripes to extend behind his head? It seems a bit off, just stopping so sharply. 18:07, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:13, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot to add the OA and why it was redone. :3 17:33, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Does this count as a triangle tabby? I think it looks realistic, but it looks kinda triangle-y, and we're redoing it for that reason, so.... <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  15:21, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks like you're wanting to do a wavy tabby, so here you go. 16:52, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

This style is at least better than the old one. And the cat you're citing is actually a mackeral tabby, Ivy. Anyway, the scar stands out a bit too much. Blur it? 01:04, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. <span style="">01:27, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

Add a tabby M on his forehead? (I wanted to do this...) 22:05, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (E) - Redone
Original artist was Bramble, needed stripes and shading tweaked. Comments? Elorisa  02:03, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

It looks kinda more ginger then the warrior one...or should the warrior be tweaked to be less green and to match this one? 02:09, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'll tweak the warrior image to match if this comes to a conflict; people get comments all the time on their images to be less green anyway xD. I think the warrior image should be tweaked, personally. Elorisa  02:10, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make the ear-pink paler. 17:07, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Duskfur (Q) - Withdrawn
She was on the redo list for unrealistic stripes, to look brown, and to get rid of the green tint. OA was Flamingomom3. First Photoshop image. Comments? 02:58, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Blur the stripes a bit. <span style="">15:01 Mon Jan 16

Actually, can you define the stripes and shading altogether? 17:47, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks flat. Add more depth to it. <span style="">13:59 Tue Jan 17

It's finished, though, when I try to reupload it, it says that the extension is the wrong MIME type. Yes, the file is .png 19:34, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

* sigh* Due to the technical difficulties mentioned above, this is withdrawn. 21:36, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 22:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Same problem o3o 22:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I can take this I guess. 23:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Ki) - Redone
First tweak/redo! OA = Mistyheart, Oblivion and Goldenpaw. (I think .-.) Redone to match other images. <span style="">14:19 Mon Jan 16

Nice :-), Lighten the image a bit and blur the shadings 15:16,January 16,2012 (UTC)

Lovely Sweet! Define the earpink. 15:26, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not lightening the image becaus eI got the colours off the apprentice xcf. The shadin gis blurred to the max now, and the ear pink is a different colour 'cause you can't see the earpink using the apprentices' image colour. *exhales* <span style="">16:26 Mon Jan 16

There's waste all around the charart. 16:31, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stupid waste. <span style="">16:43 Mon Jan 16

Blur the shading. 18:12, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore, sorry. <span style="">18:25 Mon Jan 16

Lighten the shading then, if you cant lighten whole pic. 18:30,January 16,2012 (UTC)

I would but I colour picked off the apprentice image, so I don't think I should lighten it. <span style="">20:45 Mon Jan 16

Everything cant be matched perfectly. I think you should try blur shadings more..maybe way smugle→blur? 15:59,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. And yes, I agree, you should try a couple different ways to blur the shading, cause it really does need to be blurred. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  16:19, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">01:47 Wed Jan 18

Blur the shading on the back 02:12, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:45 Thu Jan 19

Lighten up the earpink some more, I don't think it quite matches. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  00:37, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It doesn't match because you can't see the earpink over the shading. <span style="">00:57 Fri Jan 20

Hawkfrost (D) - Redone
<3. OA was Maplefern, with redos by Nightshine and Paleclaw. He needed to match his warrior, comments? 21:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * Jaw drops in amazement* Wow. O.O Anyways, :P there's a gray pixil by the tail which I think is supposed to be tail lineart. <span style="">21:24 Mon Jan 16

Re-uploaded. Thanks c: 21:32, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the pink scar lines on the lines of his muzzle  22:01, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Whoops ^^; 02:35, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Epicness. Blur the white some more a bit. <span style="">02:03, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

It's the exact same as his warrior. I layered the deputy lineart over. I'm not changing it. 02:11, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes a bit? They seem lighter than the rest. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  04:42, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

And can you give the tail stripes a harder edge like the body stripes? 02:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:41, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Cloud With Storm in Belly (Alt. E) - Tweaked
Needed to be darker. OA was SquirrelFlame. <span style="">08:40, Tue, Jan, 17, 2012

Make it a bit more darker. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  08:44, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  <span style="">09:19, Tue, Jan, 17, 2012

Make it even darker, blur the shading, and make the earpink waaaaaaay less hot pink. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:18, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pssh, hot pink ish sexy. XD I think there's neck shading, so define it. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  19:01, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye highlight. 21:57, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  1 word: Disgusting. I shall fix the missing color parts around the lineart in my next upload. The anchor tool and fuzzy selecting blur do not go well together... <span style="">01:59, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

Darken the mid-drift shading, and you might wanna redo the earpink. I think the tweaking has made the fur underneath all tinted pink around there. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:05, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading :3 <span style="">22:23 Wed Jan 18

Reuploaded -  Fixed. Hate the shading on this image. <span style="">01:55, Thu, Jan, 19, 2012

Blur it some more. It should have been this shade of grey in the first place. >.> <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  02:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the back and tail shading, define the earpink, and make the white speck in the eye pure white. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  03:47, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - Tweaked
I'm back for more! 8D Needed earpink less neon and nose less neon. OA = Echopaw and Birdpaw. Comments? <span style="">13:58 Tue Jan 17

She is so cuuuteee *steals*, blur the shadings a tad please (I know its not on the list but..) 15:56,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad and desaturate the nose. 18:20, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I touched the shading a bit, I don't really wanna mess it up. Because if I fiddle with it I will... <span style="">01:18 Wed Jan 18

Blur the earpink a tiny bit. 01:19, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded Dere you go! <span style="">01:30 Wed Jan 18

Blur the shading a bit on her right (our left) side of the body. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  22:01, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Y'all enjoy! <span style="">22:24 Wed Jan 18

Blur the shading a bit more, and maybe add/darken the neck and head shading? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:44, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry. I don't want to mess around with the shading, if you saw it, you'd know why... <span style="">21:34 Thu Jan 19

Blossomfall (Alt.Ki) - Tweaked
Attack! Last spot! Ok, I redoned shadings and hightlinks, it looks quite darker now o.O OA is Icethroat21 ,16:21,January 17,2012 (UTC)

Give her a brown nose, she looks like she has a grey nose, and desaturate the earpink a tad. 18:19, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the face 'highlight' a bit duller. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 19:12, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and well, I dont know what "desaturate" means. ,20:48,January 17,2012 (UTC)

It means to make the colour duller. 21:42, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Moon, reuploaded ,19:55,January 18,2012 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, but perhaps add a dark line of fur running fown her tail like her father Graystripe? (You don't have too) <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 03:33, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Im not sure, what the others think? ,19:43,January 19,2012 (UTC)

Sure, go for it. 22:45, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yes  23:48, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwing (W) - Tweaked
New way of texturing shading! 8D Shading needed tweaking. OA was Icethroat. Comments? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  04:35, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks better already. ^^ Blur the shading some more. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  04:37, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred to the max now. :) <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  03:44, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (W) -Redone
changes aren't showing. I shouldn't have promised to do these all... X.X Oh well. A promise is a promise. I'm considering redoing these stripes cause they look horrible. OA was Crows. Comments? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  04:39, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little bit. Breeze whisker  03:08, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. ^^ <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  03:45, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) - Redone
Redone to match the apprentice and because the stripes were horrible XD comments? <span style="">06:12 Wed Jan 18

Beautiful! Lighten the earpink please, i cant see it. , 14:53,January 18,2012 (UTC)

This might be a stupid question to you, but do you mind lightening the stripes abit? It says be's both pale and light...so, yeah. 17:30, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

And maybe make the earpink more visible. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Phew. The old image was bugging me. x.x Can you blur the shading on the tail just a tad? 22:54, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lessen the shading on the tail, too? 02:13, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded You're right, Bloo... if he's described with not one, but two synonyms of "fair", I should probably make it lighter XD Is this good? <span style="">02:16 Thu Jan 19

Mistystar (W) ~ Redone
I feel bad that I got a space after I declined two images. DX Ah well... anyway, I copied everything off the deputy image I made for her and just changed it to accommodate the tail and leg. Comments? 21:53, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. OA was Sandstar with a redo (?) by Icestorm. 22:00, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I love this Shelly >:D Lighten the shading. 23:46, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is exactly the same as on the deputy image, opacity, shape, and all. For consitancy's sake, I'd rather leave it as it. 00:06, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Mintfur (RC) (W) - Tweaked
Space! Original artist was Sandy, and the shading needed to be darkened. 21:56, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! But is it possible for you to smooth out the highlights a bit? Also, it looks like there's a pixel missing at the top of the eye. 21:58, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

There's no pixel missing, and I'm not sure how to smooth the highlights out, I've never done it before. 22:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Take your shading layer and apply it over the entire charart. Then erase what you want to remain lightened and smooth the shading out. Usually works for me. 22:06, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded That method didn't work, since the highlights were on the same layer as the pelt layer, but I figured something out. 22:27, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Brightspirit (W) - Redone
Redone because she was a triangle tabby. OA was Sandy and then redone by me. Comments? 23:54, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Looks amazing! Can you blur the haunch shading a bit more though? 23:59, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Stunning. Can you please define the shading a bit? 01:10, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ Redone
Needed to match leader. The OAs were Sandstar12, Echoheart, Bramble, Stoneclaw33, and Paleclaw. Comments? 23:55, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder and tail shading. Looks nice! 23:58, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

The torn ear should be on the other side. And define that haunch shading. ;3 <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:04, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Wee! Purty! Any way, this looks a tad to blue, unlike the other images. 01:09, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Needed to be redone to match the leader image... Not sure about the OA, but, the file page says Mousetalon, (transparency by Bramble) and Ivystripe...Comments? 23:55, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and define the shoulder shading/highlight. Great work! 23:57, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Give her a torn ear. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  23:59, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) -Tweaked
Shading needed to be blurred. Horid >:U 23:55, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Its not horrid. Just blur the shading more. 23:57, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks and I forgot the OA (LightMoon.) 23:58, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define that tail and haunch shadin. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:02, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I also Blurred the earpink a little. 00:09, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and brighten the face highlight thing. I do enjoy stalking your images. XD <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:12, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lol Sky, blur teh shading more. This is really good. 01:07, January 20, 2012 (UTC)