Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Henry (KP) ~ Redone
Was on the Tweak list for being redone. OA was Bramble. This is horrible >:U 21:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Not. Horrible. Great. Is there a tabby M? If it's those two lines then disregard this... 21:33, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's just two lines. 21:36, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the back lines more maybe use the eye ref. on the tutorial, and darken the shading under his 'arm' 22:34, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think you should darken the overall shading. 00:29, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I was kind of confused about what you said, Wild. 03:07, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

And about the eyes, I copied 'em off of CLoudtail. 03:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look kind weird though, like his eyes are bugging out about a worm on the ground or something. Could you copy off the tutorial? They look more natural on there. 05:26, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes and thicken them. ,15:18,January 25,2012 (UTC)

I meant smudge the stripes into the fur, and the part where the belly meets the front arm there should be some shading, and use the PCA charart tutorial use the eye chart. 15:42, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. You guys were right abou tthe eyes xD 21:48, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the tail? 00:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the end of the stripes, darken the shading, add depth to the eyes, and add a couple more stripes to the legs. 01:55 Thu Jan 26

Lighten/define the earpink some more, too. I can barely see it. o3o 02:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes even more (smudge their points so they're sharper and less rounded at the ends) and add some more depth to the eyes. 03:44 Fri Jan 27

Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. 22:55, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded. 20:25, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white speck in the eye pure white. o3o Epic. <3 07:45, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:37, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink or something, old grandpa has trouble seeing it x3 Sky Dovahkiin  22:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-Uploaded. Gramps >:D 22:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define-ith the ear-ith pink-ith. *;3* 23:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back every so slightly. Daaaaaang, Fire. Where'd this skill come from all of the sudden? xD (jk, it's beautiful) 19:58, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Pfft, what talent? Re-Uploaded. 21:06, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Littlebird (E) ~ Tweaked
It needed to be less neon and bright.. I don't think changes are showing. :P 20:27, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't realise I went over the limit >.< 20:29, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Don't worry, we all do that sometimes. XD Declining for now. You can repost when it's under the limit again. :P 21:19, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Its okay now. :3 23:05, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Why did she have white on her before? 0.o That wasn't artist's choice till recently.... Anyways, could you lighten it? And maybe make it a bit orange tinted, it makes it look more natural. 02:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the "highlights" 02:30, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the highlights, lightened it, and made it more orange.
 * That was me. .3. 01:34, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit. Sky Watchu want? 03:05, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 02:53, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Ki) ~ Redone
Sorry this is sloppy Dx OA was Quietstep with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart. Comments? 23:25, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, why do none of her images match her leader image? I just noticed they're all far too dark. 03:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  12:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 15:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be defined. 00:04, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

-Re-Uploaded.- 22:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

^^ Up there, with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart.. this is not twitter xD. Anyways add depth to the eyes, but if you don't want to you don't have to. 07:42, Tue, Jan, 31, 2012

XDDD Sorry. Re-Uploaded. 20:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Tornear (W) ~ Redone
Here's Tornear. That texture you see is fur that I did on a different layer. It's kind of plain I know, but I'll probably redo him. 12:00, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be a little longer. Nice job.^^ 12:02, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry I forgot the OAs. OAs are Bramble, Goldenpaw, and Sandstar12. 12:25, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you. Change it if you redid it. =P 15:19, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It was redone, Ivy. 20:46, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

He should have stripes on the tail. Sky Watchu want? 03:49, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Trying to match his elder. 17:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

On the elder, it looks like there's a few more stripes along his back. Can you add some in? 22:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Once again; ew. 23:32, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, make the stripes longer and sharper at the ends, erase the waste between the legs, and blur the shading. 01:25 Sun Jan 29

Possibly connect a few stripes when you add more, and blur the edges of the stripes a bit. 23:17, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:51, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it. 03:14, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Sky Dovahkiin  06:52, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:16, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) ~ Tweaked
First tweak, and I'm not proud of it. He needed patchy fur. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire Comments? 12:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, it looks good. ^.^ Could you perhaps blur where the skin meets the fur...? Where it meets looks too sharp. 13:13, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The patches look like you're doing them fo ra cat with long fur. Try looking at Spiderstar's leader image for an example of a patch in short fur. Also, they look pretty red, when he probably has pale skin considering his fur color. Contrary to popular belief, they don't need to match his ear pink. 14:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ew. 15:16, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Kay, maybe not that pale. Also... my point in linking to Spiderstar was to show that the patches really don't need to be outlined. Just blur them in to look like fur, not chipped paint. 17:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And no, the patches are not the same color as the ear pink. I just darkened the skin color. 17:28, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the skin, as you would the earpink on an apprentice or leader. 17:30, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the help on the patches Shelly. 23:28, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, they're still not quite there yet. 02:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Put a few lines around each patch, it helps keep lineart sense and helps to create a more natural feel (again, it kind of goes along with making sense with the lines). 04:47, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give the patches a more tanner look? Breeze whisker  20:02, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:45, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 03:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sorreltail (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match her other images. Gotta say, I love Sorreltail's design. OA was Insanular. Comments? 15:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the sides of the patches a little more. Nice ^^ 15:18, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Ewww! Awesome job! Define the ear pink please ,17:01,January 27,2012 (UTC)

Leafstorm, ewww? XD And specifically define the one on our left. 23:08, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Haha ewwww. XD Can you make the black go a bit farther on her haunch? 00:05, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? Pretty. :) Breeze  whisker  20:00, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ya hurt me bad, Leaf. :C 21:29, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Haha. XD Darken the earpink. Sky Dovahkiin 01:40, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same color as the warrior and apprentice, so I don't think I should. 03:16, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on the ginger ear, I can't even see it Dx. Elo legs 13:35, January 31, 2012 (UTC) Again, it's the same color as on every charart but the queen. And they're both ginger. 13:40, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt W) ~ Redone
Hey look, he's back! 8D OA=Nightshine with redo by Iceheart, same reasons as I stated earlier... Comments? 05:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I was sorta hoping he'd stay away...kidding. Lighten up the tail shading a bit. Sky Watchu want? 06:04, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink a tad, it looks sharp. Elo legs 20:55, January 29, 2012 (UTC) Cool texture. Define the eye depth. 03:20, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Heavystep (W) ~ Redone
He needed a redo because he was a triangle tabby before. OA was Bracken. Breeze whisker  06:12, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Goregeous. Define the earpink? 06:14, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

So good >.> Does he have a lighter chest? If it does, it beeds blurring cause it looks sharp. Sky Watchu want? 06:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  15:27, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn;t have a lighter chest...but since he's a tabby, tabbies usually have lighter underbellies or chests. So keep it there. 23:22, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I lightened his chest, belly, muzzle, bottom of his tail, and his paws. Breeze whisker  02:10, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the paler paws some. 02:16, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and it looks transparent a bit. 16:40 Sun Jan 29

What looks transparent? Breeze whisker  19:53, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink isn't transparent but the earpink still needs to be defined. 23:12, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  22:27, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

This is amazing!! *u* Can you make the earpink a tad bit pinker? It's still kinda hard to see. 03:17, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The eye looks kinda odd.... I don't think it's any style of eyes I've seen before. I know it's artist's choice, so you don't have to, but any chance of you changing it? This is absolutely breathtaking regardless. 07:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Its fine, as long as it shows eye color, there's nothing to worry about. Also, with what Heartmountain said, maybe make the earpink color the same as the older image, but not as pale..? cause this color right know kinda blends with the pelt. idunnolol. 00:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) ~ Redone
OA was Mousetalon. He was a triangle tabby, and I got permission to redo him. Comments? 23:19, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Ears need to be tuffed. 23:25, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit. 02:20 Sun Jan 29

There is some white/pale gray pixels above the tail tip. 02:50, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Darken/define the shading. Breeze whisker  19:55, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purplely. -- Elo legs 20:54, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">07:26 Wed Feb 1

Deadfoot (D) - Tweaked
Snagged the last spot! Original artist was Darkhallows, with a redo by Paleclaw, and the twisted paw needed to be on his left leg. Comments? 04:57, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Actually it was surprisingly a tweak by me, though only really the old lineart ended up being kept. XD But doesn't matter. :P Darken the front leg farthest from us. 05:26, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Haha, it looked like it was redone to me. 16:14, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You've been asked about this before. Could you fix the lineart on his paws? It's too thin, and you're usually not supposed to be changing the lineart besides what you're supposed to do. 03:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I thought this project was about making accurate character art, not fussing over paw lineart. This is consistent with his description, so it's fine. No random person browsing through the wiki is going to care about the paw lineart. 18:01, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't matter. You can't edit the lineart however it pleases you. You have been told to change it before, but blatantly ignored us. Just change it; it's not that big of a deal. 19:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Only for this image. 20:40, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The tail seems like it's been cut off. Put lineart over the whole thing and then fill that in, or move the image up...basically just do something. 23:38, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Dodge (Ro) - Tweaked
OA was Mossy. Just darkened the shading. Comments? 05:08, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste between the two hind paws. 20:03, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

And waste on the back. =P <span style="">01:59, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012


 * Nevermind that, might just be the preview. But I think there is waste around the tail. <span style="">02:51, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-uploaded 03:04, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) ~ Redone
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sunfish (W) ~ Tweaked
The bad shading on this has bugged me for a while. I'm the OA. Comments? 13:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Elo legs 13:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Y u steal my spot? XD Define the shading on the tail. 14:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random light spot on her haunch o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:52, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the ear pink smaller? I didn't think it was supposed to take up the entire ear. But, then again, it is artist's choice. XD 19:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Q) - Redone
OA was Nightshine, tweaked by Mistfire, than another tweak byLeggy Was redone to match the sharpclaw image (it was on the redo list anyways). Comments? (Changes may or may not be showing) <span style="">17:10 Tue Jan 31

Blur the shading. 18:38, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">20:39 Tue Jan 31

Define it now xF <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  22:06, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it :3 01:18, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. :3 <span style="">16:27 Wed Feb 1

Blur the shading tons. Also, Sweet, I had an OCD moment and fixed the link with Nightshine's name. xD 19:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. For some reason I can't go into source mode on stuff, so I would've changed it XD <span style="">19:33 Wed Feb 1

Cloudy (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Honeyfur, and he was a triangle tabby. Comments? 18:05, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is so cute! :D <span style="">18:15 Tue Jan 31

Reuploaded 18:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 19:17, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:42, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. 21:54, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Splash (PH) - For Approval
She also needed a stubby tail. OA was Leopardclaw, with a redo (I think) by Leaf-storm. 20:14, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

This is Beautiful, Oblivion! <3 XD Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more. 20:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Oblivion, I had this reserved and made sure no one else had it reserved. I'll let you have it but next time use CTRL + F please :( 00:18, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this because the shame burns. Ivy, please, take over. 01:00, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

As you wish 02:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just added a little fluff to her "stump" since she was born with it and it matches her to-be. 19:54, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (Ki) ~ Redone
Finally I can post this. x.x I took all the colors from his warrior image, so yeah. :3 22:33, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and define the earpink. So cute ^^ 23:53, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I knew I liked Birchfall for a reason... xD *steals* 19:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneteller (Ancient) (Softpaw) - Redone
Okay, so original artist is Sandy and the shading needed to be tweaked. Woo, I finally got a to-be and it happens to be Half-Moon! =D 23:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. I though she was a softpaw? 83 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 23:38, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

XD Oh Teldy. Define the earpink ;P 23:53, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Softpaw, to-be, same lineart :P 02:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a tad. I'm very nit picky about rank sometimes.xD <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  05:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Windflight (W) ~ Redone
Finally space 8D Anyway, It needed to match the elder. Comments? 23:51, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Mounty, your chararts have me speechless >8D Enlarge the earpink. 23:57, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Daaaw Thank you Rowan 8D 00:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oh my O_O. *revives self*. Ok, I'm ok now. Lovely! Define the ear a tiny bit. And by tiny I mean tiny. 00:25, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much Silver 8D 00:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

How in the world do you make these images? o.o Anyways, could you blur the ear pink a tad? Other than that....this is amazing<3333 19:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnstar (L) - Tweaked
In my opinion I didnt think she needed tweaking at all, but anywhoo, I made her more brown. OA = Quietstep 01:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Piper (Ki) ~ Redone
It needed to be redone for several reasons. I got permission. OA was Mistystar. Comments? 01:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I hate you for making such amazing chararts. ;.; How are you so epic? DX Anyways, the only thing I can see that could be changed is, can you lighten the shading on the legs? 07:53, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aww *sniff sniff* Thank you so much Paleh ;.; *wuggles* I don't think I'll ever be as good as you 8) 14:38, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) ~ Tweaked
She needed her shading blurred/redone, and the OA looks like Sandstar12, with a tweak by Flamingomom. I also tweaked the earpink, because I believe hot-pink isn't exactly the right shade. xD Comments? 01:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I have to go make the background transparent... I'll reupload in a sec. 01:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and blur it. 01:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stupid earpink... x.x 01:29, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. ^^ Just lighten her a bit, as this is a bit too dark to be dark gray. 07:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match apprentice image. I actually like this one. OA was Sandwich989? I'm not sure, with maybe a tweak by Bramble (but I think it was just adding transperancy. Comments? <span style="">01:57, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Cute ^^ Blur the black patches. 02:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. <span style="">02:56, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Define the shading. 19:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Flametail (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match other images. It was easy and i dont know what to do, Flametail is just edited triangle tabby. OA is Bramble, redone by Moonflight and Shellheart. ,18:13,February 1,2012 (UTC)

Wing (PH) ~ Tweaked
Let's try this again, shall we? 19:42, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and just so I don't get into trouble... OA is moi. =D 19:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)