Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Blizzardpelt, tweaked by Splashpelt, needed to be lightened, comments? 01:41, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a tad. ^-^ 02:25, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just here to say, I actually took it over and got it approved from Blizzardpelt :3 23:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:04, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur this < ears ear-pink. and center it, it looks to close to the left sides lineart. 23:22 Sat Dec 3

I think the earpink is fine...feel free to disagree with me. 15:28, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it a bit, Stoney. Not much though. 20:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste between his tail and chest. 23:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Meh. 04:25, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him some more. 23:47, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:37, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Rockshade (W) ~Redone


Okay, before y'all lose your minds, Oblivion gave me premission to de ro him, becuase everytime i re-did him, he looked like barf, and if i lightend his color, THAT color would become his lineart color, and it annoyed me, so, i asked to re-do him, and, got this, i know he looks dark-gray, but this is version one of him, and if anyone wants to see version two, just comment, and i'll up load version two. Now then, Comments? (PLEASE ask for version two, i hate this one >.>) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, OA was TottalyTawnypelt, and was then taken over by Frostheart <3, and the highlights and shading was blotchy, and he needed a small, stupmy tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, i went with version number two, 'cause, i hated how the first one looked >.> I like this one, MUCH better....so.....please comment. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:36, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur that shading tons. Thicken it as well. 02:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, a comment! Reuploaded, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:52, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading on the back, make the highlight smaller, and smooth out the shading; it looks really streaky and botchy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:05, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mind lightening the whole image? It's hard to tell which from which. And spread out the shading, along with smoothing it as Scarlet said above me. 23:06, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, give me a few mins, sorry i wans't on yesterday, I had to babysit Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 18:50, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, Reuploaded-I think his highlights look blotchy now that i made them smaller.....but....i'll blur them into oblivion before i upload them again. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:05, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploading -I blurred the shading and highlights, and fixed some blurred lineart, and added depth to the eye out of bordem.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:30, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is still very blotchy. Blur the shading on 100% with a big brush, it usually helps. If you use layers, gaussian blur the heck outta this puppy 22:38, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say redo the shading. Use a tutorial if you need help. Make him lighter as well. 23:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, i'll see what i can do. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:15, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I just re-did the image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:51, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:56, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it more. 01:52, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore, it has NO effect. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:17, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If you can't blur it more, I suggest withdrawing this image, then. I'm not saying you couldn't do it, but this shading isn't good enough to be approved. You could try and redo it, but I doubt that it would make a difference. Try Gaussian Blur 10 if you use GIMP. 02:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If you want, I could help you blur the shading. 04:40, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If Maple isn't going to blur this, you could probably just take over, Moonleaf. 08:21 Sun Dec 4


 * sighs* Look, moon, if you can help me blur it, great. If not, i'll re-do it, but i can't blur it anymore. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:54, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Here you go. :). I had to re-do the shading. 00:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:35, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, soory, thought you took over ^^; Thanks, but i liked him better with blue eyes, so i'll change that back, if you dont mind. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:38, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I thought he was more realistic with amber eyes, since pure black cats can't have blue eyes, but you're welcome to do that. ^^

Correction: I found out they can have blue eyes. 00:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I defined his highlights, left the shading, as it was fine, and gave him blue eyes, 'cause blue ish my fave color, and his eye color isnt stated. So, comments (Moon, i owe you one :) ) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:52, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it more, and redden the earpink. Honestly, I liked amber better, but I guess it IS the artist's choice... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him so the shading is noticeable. Also, the eye colour has to match his kit. 01:18, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rename is it Rockshade.warrior.png as well. 01:19, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

His kit needs to be tweaked, his shading and highlights.....*Shudders* That needs to be fixed. amd his kit's tail needs to be shorter, i'll do his kit image if need be. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Just leave his eyes amber. Blue eyes are much more uncommon than amber. If it's not broken, don't fix it. 01:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Still say his kit image needs tweaking, but, okay, i'll make his eyes amber, i'll fix his eyes in a sec. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 01:36, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Pffffttttt, fail, i thought i uploaded, but never did big time fail xD ANYWHO, Reuploaded, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and darken it. 01:48 Wed Dec 7

Purdy (KP) - Redone
OA was Insane. The old colors didn't match and the pattern looked all smudgy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I don't think he would be all scraggly and torn like that when he was a kittypet, he probably got the tears and scars when he was a loner 05:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. His old charart had torn fur, so I'm going to leave that for now. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:27, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless, what Ivy said makes sense. I don't think he should have those patches either. 16:22, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when he got the patches, so I say just keep them. Maybe he got into fights as a kittypet or something. Anyways, it's what makes Purdy...well, Purdy! Keep 'em, Scarlet. 17:31, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste near his right foreleg. 01:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

The non-tabby part of the fur almost looks gray to me, dunno if that's just me or not. Did you color-pick from his elder? 01:15, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivy, yeah I did.

Blur the earpink and saturate the non-tabby part of the fur so it matches the elder. Also add some mottles to the tabby stripes so it matches the elder. Lookin' good, gurlll 08:22 Sun Dec 4

Re-uploaded.

Erase the waste to the far left of the image and make the shading on the collar more consistent by blurring it a bunch. Looks good ^^ 02:44 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. Redid the color. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 18:13, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rainbow collars! ..I love you. Blur the spots just a little. 21:21, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

There's also some waste near his right foreleg... Still <3 23:47, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

If you're keeping the patches, should you have the ragged ears as well? Sky.....  Just...dust and echoes 00:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (Lo) - Redone
BWAHAHAHAHA first image for a while. Color didn't match her leader image, shading/highlights needed to be redone. Blah blah blah. OA was Sandstar12. 20:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Snow, you need to darken your sig so people can read it... Anyway, the eyes on the leader have a ring of orange in them. 22:34, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 23:31 Fri Dec 2

Blur the shading. 16:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. -- 15:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 16:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangluar. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:16, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:14, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing (W) - Tweaked
Woo, original artist was Sandy and the shading needed to be tweaked. 04:56, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Pretty! 05:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Spur of the moment decision. Blurred and thanks! 06:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit. Theese eese bootifulll.... 08:29 Sun Dec 4

Blur the shading and define the earpink. 22:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (WC) (E) ~ Redone
I just realized I named the file wrong so it didn't reupload. I'll try to fix that. Anyways, OA = Bramble, and it was on the redo list because he needed to be more brownish cream, and the project has a disdain for triangle tabbies. Comments? 16:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes stand out a little more? 16:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a tad bit lighter and blur the rump shading more. This is really neat! 19:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlight on the rump bigger, blur the shading a bit more and lighten it. 21:55, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, please stop repeating what other people said. 22:28 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded. These stripes are so failish... 06:00, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Grrr. Trollsky smash wife. xD Perhaps make the earpink slightly bigger and blur? Sky.....  Just...dust and echoes 18:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I liek deh stripes. Could you make the colour a bit... warmer? *doesn't know how to explain* it's kinda dull right now. 02:30 Tue Dec 6

Poppyfrost (Ki) - Tweaked
Original Artist was Maplefern; patches needed to be dappled. Comments? Elorisa  17:14, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the patches less smudged and make the dapples more like the ones on her other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:10, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! So cute! Make <- this ear pink more triangular. Actually, make 'em both. And one is lighter/darker than the other ear-pink. 22:56 Sun Dec 4

Blur the patches. 23:10, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around her left and back paws. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:20, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and it needed to be longhaired. 17:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

define the shading on the white and smudge the stripes along the edges of the patch their in - 20:01, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 20:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Both ears need to be brown, not onl one, if you notice on his warrior 20:28, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, please 21:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, don't repeat things that have already been said. Smudge the paw on <--- that side a little bit. Darken the shading just a touch. 22:02, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:04, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate the brown and darken the markings. 20:08 Tue Dec 6

Darken the stripes - 23:02, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 00:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Honeyfern (Ki) ~ Redone
I had to re-do this one like ten times before I thought it was alright. xD So sad that I didn't get to do Lilykit or Seedkit... .3. 19:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Baww, she looks like a little pot of honey! But on her warrior image the stripes are a bit farther apart. 20:15, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! ^-^ How is this? 02:04, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's lovely. Great job. Darken the shading a bit? <span style="">02:34 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded Thank you, Wildheart. Darkened the shading. 02:55, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay... Now I'm gonna be a hypocrite, but... lighten the shading XD <span style="">20:06 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded So you want it back like this? xD  21:49, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 22:57, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the tail shading. 03:35, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Fawnstep - Tweaked
Whew, one spot left! Shading needed darkening, OA= Hiddensun, and Rainwhisper added white paws after that. - 20:24, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list for this, but the eyes are very neon. Can you lighten or darken them to a more natural color? 20:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

And make the herbs a more natural colour also. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

A more natural color on the eyes and herbs, and the paws look a bit gray. 21:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow: Please refrain from repeating comments that have already been said. 22:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

And the paws are fine, it's just shading. <span style="">22:20 Sun Dec 4

Could you fix the shading on the paws? it's bothering me. It looks like there's parts of it that are lighter then it should be for shading. I'm not sure how you'd go about doing that though... Maybe add another layer and try and balance it out... 19:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think the paws look fine, honestly :3 but could you fix the one really bright white pixel near where the chest meets the legs? <span style="">02:36 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded - heh, Im so confused - 23:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste near her right paw :D 23:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Snaketail (E) - Tweaked
Can someone help me get rid of the waste? :3. It's tweaked, honest xD. Orginal artist was Ashshadow' Neede shading blurred and gray flecks on chin. Elorisa  01:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll hlp you get rid of the waste. One moment please. 01:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some white parts on the tail, and can you blur the shading a bit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There ya go Elo =3 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there, *Was requested to get rid of re-appearing waste* One seccond, then,. ^^ . 02:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks really blurred to me; fix that? <span style="">02:37 Tue Dec 6

But the lineart isn't blurred; I checked xD. Before I reuploaded. -- Elorisa   13:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It sure looks blurred though.... And there's still empty white specks on the tail and back ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:12, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is fine, I think. Blur the highlights. 18:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is blurred. I don't care that you say it isn't...it looks odd like that. Can you fix it, please? 23:09, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't even know how I'd fix it...>.> -- Elorisa   03:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it not so dark all around the lineart. And if you truly can't do that then maybe you should withdraw this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:57, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

So I'm supposed to withdraw something because I can't do something with it...>.>. I'll just redo it. ;-; -- Elorisa   21:37, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Barley (Ro) - Redone
OA was Sandy, and there was a lot of things wrong with him, including blurred lineart, little to no actual shading that needed blurring, blotchy shading, etc., etc. 02:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

His eye is in shadow and needs depth, and I feel there should be another light spot on his face, blend the tail shading out more. 18:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:32, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. 23:45, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Too dark? 23:50, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect! Make the ear-pink a tad smaller please. <span style="">01:11 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. 01:14, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder and tail shading. 22:55, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:58, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) - Redone
OA was Maplefern, with tweaks by Cloudskye and a redo by Icestorm. He needed his tawny head removed as that was a mistake and his stripes/mottles redone. I made him ginger with brown patches, as that is how I interpreted his description. I'm so happy I finally got a complicated charart. XD Comments? 07:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Brighten the haunch highlight. 20:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a tad. :3 21:41, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden it as well. 23:44, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. <span style="">01:14 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. 16:47, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink. This is prettyyy <span style="">20:04 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. 22:07, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Just darken the tail shading. 22:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudges some. 01:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the tail, but I'm not changing the smudges. 04:26, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanstar (L) - Tweaked
(uh now see waste! *running to fix it*) Yes, I made him more brown, black looked like dark green, i edited it as well and I edited shadings, OA is Bramble and (?) tweaked by Iceheart? (there is edited ear-pink) ,15:04,December 5,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs please :3 23:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste under his front foot. 00:47, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more. 01:22, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes,yes reuploaded ,16:36,December 6,2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Q)- Tweaked
Needed a torn ear to match the warrior. `<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes

Do you think you could make it pointy? <span style="">01:17 Tue Dec 6

That's how the normal ear goes though...unless you mean the bit on the inside. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 01:21, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink a bit more and also blur the scars on her face a bit. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:24, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The scars are fine - 22:59, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

There's a small amount of waste around the image. 23:44, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. `<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 18:48, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefur (W. Alt) ~ Redone
Ahahaha, I'm sure you all remember this one. Well, I re-did it. Considering the color was a bit off. I matched the warrior's colors, not the elder's, since the elder needs to be tweaked for highlights being waaaaay too bright. 16:32, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Adding this so I don't get whined at. OA is none other than myself. =P 16:32, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Can you define the ear-pink a tad? 18:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the sahding a bit. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:25, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I quite like the darker shading on this one, so I'm not going to lighten it. Re-uploaded. 23:08, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Bwahahaha, I remember this one. Make the earpink less neon-ish. 01:44, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:31, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I did her warrior, might as well do her kit as well. Fixed shading and highlights. OA was Pantherstorm. I did my best to get all of the waste off, if you see anymore I'll get it. Comments? 20:31, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and erase all the waste (by the tail and paws) <span style="">20:35 Tue Dec 6

Make the earpink a bit bigger on both ears. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:27, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't I not allowed to change things that weren't down for tweaking? 21:55, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Why wouldn't you change them? Might as well do it now; if it's not done now, it'll just have to be tweaked again later. 22:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry, I thought there was a rule or something, unless it was changed. Fixed earpink, shading, and waste. 20:34, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

You have to re-upload this over her kit image so it will work properly on the charart template. ;3 21:53, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Floss (Lo) - Redone
Iceheart gave me permission to redo her. The shading was really bugging me, and the image is over two years old. OA is Hawktalon. 21:28, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights, their to bright. <span style="">00:48 Wed Dec 7

Re-uploaded. They're* 00:59, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (K)~ Redone
OA was Swiftpelt and it needed to be redone to match the other versions. 00:19, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink stand out more, either by defining it, or changing the color. I luff this! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:17, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks but i got the ear pink from the other chararts and its barely blurred at all. Theress really nothing i can do with it. 01:28, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define the stripes a tad. <span style="">01:41 Wed Dec 7

Reuploaded- 01:48, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (L) - Redone
Redone to match deputy. OA was Bramble then Icestorm. Don't comment on the colors not matching, they were taken directly from he deputy's xcf file. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:05, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink into the ear some. So amazing <3 01:12, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (K) ~ Redone
OA was Willowheart1231, and I redid it to match his elder version and give him ragged fur. 01:24, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think his ears would have been sliced as a kit. >.> 01:35, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, during TW, he was tweaked to have torn ears...I remember Raggedstar or another character had torn ears from fighting as a kit, so its reasonable to have torn ears on a kit. 01:39, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, where is the torn ears in his description? 01:42, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt. L) - Redone
OA was Sunspirit, then Echostar, and it needed to be less neon-orange and needed stripes. <span style="">02:36 Wed Dec 7

Darken the shading - 03:38, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Stormtail (W) - Withdrawn
Yahooooo, another solid! Shading tweak, OA=Echomist and then Sandy tweaked it - 04:58, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and maybe blur the haunch shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 10:07, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Haha!Too bad, cuz I'm withdrawing this for the new apprentice blanks BD - 00:48, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Millie (W) - Redone
The consistency police are probably after me :(. I really am proud of this, even if it was really difficult. Original artist was Dawnfeather, and it needed to match the queen. 18:15, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that much different, actually. It's also really pretty! Lighten the stripe color so it's more of a gray. 18:20, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It IS really pretty! ^^ Lighten the base coat a tad too and blur the stripes. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  18:43, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the fans will lay off the page now that she has such a pretty picture. ;) Could you add just a bit more depth to her eye? 18:57, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so proud. ^-^ Changes are in the file history. 20:49, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, they're showing. 20:50, December 7, 2011 (UTC)