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Luna (KP) - For Evaluation
Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:59, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Get rid of every other white thing except for the tail-tip. Unless specifically stated to have other white points, we follow our tortoiseshell rule here. Also don't align your images. 14:01, 11/12/2016

And this image needs to be renamed to File:Luna.kittypet.png 14:04, 11/12/2016

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 14:42, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you brighten the tail-tip? It looks a little too gray to me. 14:42, 11/12/2016

define the shading on the legs and tmake the brown a little less green looking. 15:59, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:09, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Do you mind smudging the brown and ginger a bit?

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:50, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the tail and legs? 02:57, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 05:41, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and give it some shape; it looks rather flat and I'm having some trouble making it out.

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:54, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

could you whiten the tail tip please?

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:26, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some more depth to the shading? The way I'd do it is add a 'base' shading that's darker and less blurred than the rest. I can give you an example if you don't know what I mean.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:24, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Give me an example, please Джулия де Мортон (talk) 14:56, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Okay so you add a base shading, sorta like this (blur/smudge it off course) and that's how I give my images depth. Of course, this shouldn't be exact, adjust yours so it matches your shading placement.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:11, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 12:42, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

There seems to be an irregular amount of ear pink on the --> ear.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:43, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 09:22, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:11, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:22, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Darken some more, please?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:04, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Still working? 01:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) ~ For Approval
i redid the base color and ear pink to match the apprentice —  Minkclaw   19:38, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Theres waste around the left ear. 19:52, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Remove the texture, as the apprentice image that was posted before yours does not have texture.

The base on this still looks a lot darker than the other image

I color picked it from the Apprentice, so I think its alright? —  Minkclaw   20:36, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   20:42, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

The nose is empty, and there's still waste around the <--- ear, like Breeze mentioned.

Re-Upps waste removed, gray cats don't have pink noses, they have dark gray —  Minkclaw   03:08, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

the nose must match the apprentice. there's grey cats with pink noses in this series already. 23:12, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

I think the eyes must be blue 02:15, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   17:32, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking a bit on the back foot and haunch, and the nose pink should match that of the apprentice. 19:54, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten/smudge the shading.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:37, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, forgot to put this —  Minkclaw   03:53, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the nose, or something along those lines, so the bright color doesn't just jump out at you? You have a few pixels to work with, so it's possible to do.

Re-Upps fixed the brightness of the nose pink some as well as added shading —  Minkclaw   22:56, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Her apprentice image has a nose color of #DD8AA6, this one has a nose color of #7A4949 (that's the brightest color I see on the nose since it's shaded.). Just saying. 02:33, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Forgot to mention, there's also waste around the < ear. I can open up the image, take out my color-picking tool, and I would find red-pink colors.02:35, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, I've already removed the waste there's no more.. —  Minkclaw   21:17, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

There is, but it's very light. Take out your color picking tool and sweep it outside the lineart. I can still see the waste there. 01:43 November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   03:18, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. <span style="">14:13, 11/27/2016

The waste around the ear is still there; it's further out but I can still see it.

Re-Upps, since the Apprentice was declined I changed the eye color back to amber, re-added shading, also dd shading depth but its a little darker than before. —  Minkclaw   21:22, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste around all the image. 21:24, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   21:34, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is a transperant pixel--> along the very bottom of the tail. 21:39, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   21:52, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed.

i don't see it? I followed the eye thing from the Apprentice's tutorial plus I used some of the other KP as examples. —  Minkclaw   03:22, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I can move one of the eye's over a little if that's what needed? —  Minkclaw   15:03, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

That's exactly what I was going to ask you to do. Mobile doesn't allow for in-depth comments.

Re-Upps, moved the right eye over just a tad. —  Minkclaw   22:24, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there's a ... idk, but there's a part of the texture or something missing from --> eye and the surrounding area, and it seems like it was just cut out of the image.

It wasn't really missing I just seemed to have made that area darker for some odd reason —  Minkclaw   17:13, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the lighting on the hip? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:17, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

what do you mean? I think its fine? —  Minkclaw   17:08, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Imma agree with Jayie here; there's very little light on the hip. The shading there is much overblurred and could actually use some depth, as well.

Re-Upps thats all im gonna remove, I removed the most of it. —  Minkclaw   15:46, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

I think there's some shading waste in the space between the back paw and the front paw. 00:51, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   15:22, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail; the shading looks a bit flat and it seems to be all one color. there should be at least some variation due to shading and lighting.

Wrenflight (Star)- Declined
Here she is. Comments? First character! :) 23:51, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

This should say For Evaluation in the header. And lighten the shading up. It looks too solid. <span style="">00:59 Tue Nov 22

There is a transparent pixel in the --> ear. Also, be sure the image is before your comments or signature, and it shouldn't be a thumbnail.

Redo 02:20, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Think I may redo. 20:10, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 21:15, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? 21:17, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 21:30, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Try to even out and match the texture better to the other images

Did you trace over the lineart? The lines look a bit wiggly. 05:57 November 23, 2016

Yeah I did,I wouldn't do it but when I paste the image onto gimp the back round turns black. So usually I trace it over with pencil, then hide the layer under it so it's white. 20:30, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Make sure the image mode is RBG, I think that's what the problem is. 20:32, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

This image needs to be reuploaded under File:Wrenflight.star.png, not what it's named now.

Omg, still won't work. O_O 20:46, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 22:56, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Some of the original lineart seems to have disappeared.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:40, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, like I said Stealth. I have to trace over it because the background becomes black. talk about Annoying. Then I have to retrace then, color. 03:09, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 03:40, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Try to blur/smudge the shading on the ear. 03:47, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Rendone 04:22, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred between the ---> leg and the chest. 17:36, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 17:50, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink needs to match the color from her other images. 18:12 November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 18:28, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

You need to reupload over Wrenflight.star.png, instead of uploading multiple files.

Alright, one question though. Should I upload the next tweak under Wrenflight.star or should still use this one? 19:30, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

You need to use the file I told you; we have naming guidelines that must be followed.

Mk. 19:34, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

There we go. :) 19:37, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe darken and smooth out the shading? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Hello World!  22:54, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 23:58, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Gonna redo because I found a new style. 06:18, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 07:03, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

the shading looks hard edged, blur it please —  Minkclaw   15:04, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 17:04, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred/smudged. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  00:57, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 01:35, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tail, it looks too flat right now with the shading only on the tip and the base of the tail. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:20, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 00:30, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge/blur all of the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:00, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 01:07, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink some. This looks great for your first one!<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:06, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah, will be out till Monday though to make art. Just forgot to put the name on vacation list. *slaps self*. 01:41, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Well, as per the guidelines, I have to decline this.

Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
RECLAIM! Anyways, just touched up little Quailie, and added a bit of criticism from the other Quailkit for approval. --

The white still needs to be dulled quite a bit. It's way too bright. Could you also smudge/smooth it out? <span style="">14:16, 11/27/2016

The colors on this need to match the other image. 15:49, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Like Waterclaw said, colors need to match, especially ear pink, eyes and pelt color. Sorry if this is repeating. Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I am  a  true Monster  22:40, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Colors no longer have to match, due to the other image being withdrawn. Could you smooth out the shading a bit? It abruptly cuts off, or so it seems, and it should be a bit smoother on the body and tail.

Re-uploaded TFW you leave your computer alone for a minute to get food and the next you almost upload a charart with a gun above it because your brother graffitied over your art --

Blur the chest shading a tad. It's a bit too sharp. 03:28, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Brightened the belly 'cause I noticed it was way too dull and I had trouble seeing it. --

Smooth out the shading a bit more in general. 21:36, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

I know you don't have to match the other image, but if this one has white on the bottom of the chest like the last one (I can't tell), then maybe lighten the shading on the white so we can see it better? If there isn't white there, then ignore this. :P Also, smooth out the shading on the shading on the tail, and have it follow the curve of the tail more, and not quite the sharp curve that it's on now that has the entire tip cast in shadow, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:29, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded it's actually the belly, not the bottom of the chest, Jayie. If I got my way, Quailkit would have a much bigger belly than he does RN, but other PCA'ers disagreed. I want a bigger area, sniffle sniffle. I also tried to do the tail as depicted in Sunjaw's guide, but it's long-haired, so I tried...? my best to do it as a shorthair. --

I think with this shading placement, there should be more shading at the top of the back. Can you add some there please? Also, smudge/blur the ear pink.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:08, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload --

Nice^ Perhaps define the eye depth some.

'Re-upped Re-upped? Is that a word? --

Milkfur (MV) (Q) ~ For Approval
First queen and white cat. Comments? I tried to match the other image's shading. -

could you smooth the texture/shading, can't tell which it is, but it looks blotchy? —  Minkclaw   21:23, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, I was trying to match the other image. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Hello World!  22:50, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job :) Perhaps even out the texture some, mainly on the body and tail.

Re-Ups Thanks! - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  01:10, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Give the overall shading a bit more depth, especially on the tail and stomach. Remember, a pregnant cat would have a fairly rounded belly and the shading should show that with the depth.

Re-ups Thanks for that! I think it's okay now? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:57, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

it looks like there's some white leaking into the <-- ear —  Minkclaw   17:21, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, and have the shading on the tail follow the direction of the fur more, if that makes sense. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:31, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  23:00, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:09, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  13:10, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste just above the head. 18:18, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  20:46, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

I loooove the design for this! Anwyays, if I'm not mistaken, the blue on the <--- eye is leakeing onto the black part, I think? 20:57, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Leafpaw (VS) (App) - Declined
Came out better than I expected 21:23, November 27, 2016 (UTC) this needs to match, File:Leafpaw (VS).kit.png, the black needs to be smudged quite a bit and possibly darken texture? —  Minkclaw   21:26, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Please define the shading. ^^ 21:28, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste all around the left (our left) ear and on that side of the head.

Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster 21:34, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:35, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't see the difference? The black is still blotchy and the shading I can't see at all. —  Minkclaw   21:38, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The ear pink < on that ear is barely noticeable with the overwhelming black. Also, the shading seems to be PURE black.....

Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster  21:54, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:25, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

On the other image, there seems to be more defined lighter parts. Could you try to match the colors a bit more?

There is nothing wrong with using black shading, and it is perfectly acceptable. <span style="">23:39, 11/27/2016

the texture is underneath the patches on the kit, not on top. also needs black on (her left) side of the muzzle, the lighter grey is much more dfeined and the black is darker than on this, as well as the cream being paler and much less of it. 07:46, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:17, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded There was too much black >.<  19:20, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

break up some of the black, define the cream a bit, and the nose should be a dark grey. looking good. 22:27, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:21, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink and nose color still need to match. Also, maybe add more gray, and there is a small patch of that cream color on the left (our left) ear. This is getting so good Cinderrrr! Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I am  a  true Monster  02:25, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Argh I accidentally hid the earpink, I'll fix that later. (Also, Winter, you might want to put your signature in User:Winter432/Sig, it takes up a ton of room this way. In your signature box, put User:Winter432/Sig .  Sorry for the off-topic >.<)  02:32, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:35, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Cinder. Also, maybe still add MORE gray, since the other image has lots. 04:38, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:42, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Darken shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:33, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:19, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

The black fur seems softer than what's shown on the image, can you sharpen it a little?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:10, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Still working? 23:09, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Cricketkit (Star) - Declined
Here is Cricketkit. I added some texture, though I made it a little transparent so you can see the dapples. 21:58, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

this needs renamed to File:Cricketkit.kit.png —  Minkclaw   21:50, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Actually, you were correct in your original naming of the image as File:Cricketkit.star.png; this is her StarClan image, not her kit image. As for the image, could you define the shading a bit? 23:45, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Redone  00:04, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

My apologies then on the naming, im super exhausted and must not have payed attention. —  Minkclaw   02:00, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there's an orange spot on her muzzle next to her nose. 02:17, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

It does seem like it, but im preety sure its part of the nose. 03:32, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

no that her muzzle, the nose is very small —  Minkclaw   03:57, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Im at school right now, fix it when I get home. 14:03, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 21:18, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading, and give the eyes a liiiiiitle more depth? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:53, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, it looks red Shypaw11 (talk)

Redone 15:47, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

smudge/blur earpink.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:16, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Cloudmist (W) - Declined


-- 22:08, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Earpink needs to match the apprentice, and I can't see the pupil

Reups -- 22:19, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like the ear pink is too far down, can you bring it higher? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  23:10, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Any chance you can add some shading to the furthest hind paw? The one tucked away. 23:18, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Fill in the eye color, define the light on the tail, and blur the main body shading a tad. 23:41, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean by "fill in the eye color"? I did fill it in. -- 00:23, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I couldn't see that it was filled in. I do think you should define the eye depth, though. 01:07, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reups -- 23:41, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading - I can barely see it on my screens

The ear pink still hangs too low on the closest ear. Mind shortening it more from the bottom? And has there ever been a warrior image with ear pink on the furthest ear (ie. a warrior image with ear pinks on both ears)? If not, I don't think it should be there, but I may be wrong. *shrug* 03:25, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking along the back. 21:21, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Also, the ear pink seems to be overlapping the shading. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:54, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reups -- 03:39, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there is some shading leaking off the right side of the tail all the way towards the back of the back legs. And it looks like there's still some pixels of ear pink on the furthest ear. 03:54, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe add some shading on the legs and paws. Shypaw11 (talk) 01:25, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading in general; I can't see it at all.

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:17, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Dragonflykit (Star) - For Approval
I wanted to give him wings 05:44, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

this is nice ^^ can you smoothen the ear pink down just a tad on the <== ear —  Minkclaw   15:35, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe shrink the gray on the chest - he only has a patch on his left side on the kit image. I also think that I'd made the stripes just a very tiny bit darker on the kit, too.

Re-uploaded 01:44, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
I color picked from the warrior. 22:20, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

Looking good! Mind darkening the shading on the tail and flank? 00:48, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking a bit on the <--- shoulder. 21:27, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload, the shading was looking a bit flat so I also added depth  23:52, December 7, 2016

Ivy (Lo) ~ For Approval
one day ill figure out how to shade these goddamn blanks (ive been saying for nearly 6 years) 22:54, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

could you darkent he shading please —  Minkclaw   15:06, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

i can define it but i'm not going to darken it, not all shading has to be super totally really dark, not to mention i can easily see it on my screens as it is. 19:51, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded thought i uploaded this yetserday but mustve fallen asleep before i did 19:52, December 9, 2016 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Lo) ~ For Approval
>< I can't tortoiseshell very well

There's a reason why I'll probably never attempt to do tortoiseshells. XD This tint of orange looks a little...green (I think) compared to the tint on the rest of the images. If that makes sense. 01:10, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded slightly tinted to match better, but I'd already picked this from the kp, so I only did it a little.

It's still looking green. Maybe colorpick from one of the lighter parts of the image, as I think you colorpicked from a shaded part. 05:19, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Finpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 00:52, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Looking great! Mind blurring where the ginger meets the rest of the pelt, and blur a little bit of his paler parts? 01:07, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 01:12, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps smudging (not blurring) the line between the ginger and the brown with a small brush could make it appear more natural? 15:35, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

can u maybe make the ginger curve w the body or smth? more like sandynose since he's supposed to be a clone of his dad 20:05, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:34, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Puddleshine (Ro) ~ For Approval
Okay but he's precious and I love him  <span style="">01:04 Sat Dec 10 

Could you lighten the shading a bit between the torso and the shoulder?

Reups  <span style="">01:08 Sat Dec 10 

Since he's still performing his medicine cat duties, I think you could get away with adding herbs to this? He's not just a rogue.

I like drawing plants :D  <span style="">21:25 Sat Dec 10 

Ooooh, the plant thing was a good idea! Very creative! Define earpink on the frontmost ear BTW. --

reups  <span style="">02:00 Sun Dec 11 

Wavepaw (A) - For Evaluation
01:12, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Please give her more white, she only has it on her muzzle. And fix up the shading on her tail. 14:23, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

No, there's also white on her throat and tail-tip (and I think paws?). I think it's an appropriate amount of white. Mind blurring the shading on the legs, please? 14:30, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Define the white^ I can see it, but only barely, and it really looks like a solid pale gray cat at first glance.

Reuploaded. her paws are white, they just look that way because of the shading. This is all I can do without the white being pure white. 19:40, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

you can use pure white, there's no rule against it. i'd remove some of the shading off the back paws and her left front paw, still can't tell they're white. 19:58, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. 23:31, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

The shading's pretty hard-edged, especially on his white chest, tail, and haunch. Also smudge the pelt into the earpink and maybe lighten it some 01:48, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:08, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

The shading looks really blotchy - could you even it out some?

Reuploaded when you're on an iPad... 18:50, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on top of the head and <--- ear :D 18:53, December 11, 2016 (UTC)


 * There is no shading on the top of the head or any of the ears. 18:56, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Archeye (Star) - For Approval
Questions: Since my first image was approved, do I still need to put "for evaulation", and second, I wasn't sure if I should add the patchy pelt or not, but I did anyway just to be safe. And I decided to try something harder...ha...what a great idea... 01:21, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

First image was approved, so this'll be 'For Approval' instead.

Great job^ Super tiny thing, but to match the other image, add a tiny bit of pink on the tail tuft of fur.

'''Reups. '''Thanks! 19:01, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Ratscar (R) ~ For Approval
15:28, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Filou (Ki) ~ For Approval
15:33, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Shoot, I forgot to blur/smudge the stripes. I'll fix that later. 15:38, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Awesome!! Perhaps fill in the nose? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  18:26, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Great job as always. Define the earpink; I can't even see it. 03:54, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) - For Evaluation
Alright, my second attempt for a Charart. I saw another image named this...was that declined? Probably, because it wasn't on his page. Anyways, I hope this looks good. 06:50, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

The other one was withdrawn. Define the shading and make the earpink less purple-ish if you're able to. And please, don't align your images. Remove the |left code off the image, if you can't seem to figure it out. 07:06, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do all of that tomorrow. Just a question, why does the ear color have to be less purple? It looks pink enough to me, but I'm down with whatever. Opinions, anyone? 07:09, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Too much of a purple hue can make it look more bubblegum than earpink, and it looks a little unnatural. I think it could use a little more pink. 10:55, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:48, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Branch (HJ) - For Approval
dont we all love it when our art programs hate us and our siblings pester us and we need food 23:15, December 11, 2016 (UTC)