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Plumwillow (KP) ~ CBA
She ate from the twoleg an' everyone else got one... Comments? 02:19 Sat Jan 28

Can you make that curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. 02:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back a little. 02:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading too, nice job! 06:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose color. 08:07, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:38 Sat Jan 28

The lineart for the neck looks a little bit too fat/blotchy. Try copying it from Nettlesplash's or Honeypaw's.  19:53, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing, I don't feel like fiddling around with lineart. It never works out. Anyone who wants it, take it :P. 23:30 Sat Jan 28

I'll take it. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:19, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 02:27, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Darken the shadings please 17:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart out on the ---> side of her neck. 20:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg. 14:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg and the back a bit more. -- 02:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the shading to my liking. 12:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. 14:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 00:05 Thu Feb 2

Tone down the "highlights". 20:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I always use highlights. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:25, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Dont really see anything wrong. So, CBA-time! 02:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but can you blur the shading some more? -- 18:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  00:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

...continuing CBA? - 00:43, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but, blur the shading, even if you have to use the blur tool :3 01:21 Sat Feb 4

Purple already said the shading is already blurred to the max. Another lead agreed with me on the chat that this looked okay. CBA again? 02:15, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Hate to interrupt, but can you darken it a bit to match the warrior image? 06:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

If I darken it more, it will look like black. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  12:44, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading just a tad bit more? And can you colorpick off the warrior image for the earpink? 16:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, with earpink straight from the warrior. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:58, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten/define the ear-pink a bit more? The color from the warrior might've been blurred over so much that the main color had been smudged into the black. Feel free to change the shade a bit. 06:02, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit more?  ~Pouncey!  "Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" "No..."  x3 16:57, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Whoa....this is great, but, in my view....Plumwillow was never even seen at the Twoleg nest. We don't really have any evidence that she was, and even though she may have gone with the other cats, it doesn't mean that she actually took any food. 18:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Quail, look at the article: "Afterwards, Plumwillow is seen with Birdpaw, Honeypaw, Sandypaw, and Nettlesplash getting food from the elderly Twoleg woman". Anyway, add the curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. This is lovely, DJ. 22:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Are you sure, I don't want to argue, but I own the manga, and she isn't ever at the Twoleg nest. However, if you really don't agree Purplemoon can continue. 22:36, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 06:09, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  20:52, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 22:39, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting, but can you make the skin lineart curve like: ( that instead of the sking just going down straight like | that. 22:54 Sun Feb 12

Yo, Purple, I think you're allowed one image for approval. If I'm not mistaken... you have Ice and this up. 23:21, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think Paleh told me one time that you can have a loner and something else up. 02:15, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

You misunderstood Mountain, I said you can have an apprentice and a loner up, as the old rule for the apprentices still applies, that you can have two chararts up as long as one is an apprentice. Neither of your images are apprentices however, do you'll have to withdraw one, sorry. 07:01, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sigh, I'll keep Ice. Someone else can have this. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:55, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do it. any way Im Baccckk! >:D  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave! 00:38, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay all colors are from the warrior. Comments? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 01:18, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Curve the neck in like this: ( I love this. 01:26, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't curve it all the way so...better? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 01:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yep. Now thicken it by a pixel? 02:19, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:00, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't thicken it to much but I did thicken it at certain spots. Comments? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 01:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Sky To Kill An Empire  11:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded There. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 02:48, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 06:22, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave! 02:57, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink some more? Other then that, this looks great. :3 03:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 04:58, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I defined the shading a bit. Better? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 02:33, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I really don't care if those eyes match any of her other images...but please...can we give some life to those eyes? They look dull and listless. 03:10, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

'Reuploaded Okay a little bit picky but...done  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave! 03:24, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 20:47, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner image! I'm in love with this <333 &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 19:34, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are spotz not colored in and can you blur the ear-pink more and add depth to the eyes and define the shading more? 19:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this File:Mist (Lo).loner.png, please. =) It looks good~ 20:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink. I think Mist was my second ever charart! *good times* Sky Dovahkiin 21:30, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are a couple stray white pixles on the belly, the tail, the elbow and the hind leg 00:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

As this is a kit doing this image, I changed the heading. 03:04, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Well done Oakbreeze! This seems 85% complete to me...I will add you in as an apprentice now, and since I've evaluated this, this is now Up For Approval. 03:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Oakbreeze? 05:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I completely forgot about this! I'm so sorry! I'll work on it right now. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:00, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:06, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Hun this is beautiful!! Just blur/smudge the earpink a bit ^^ 01:00, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I kind of gave up on blurring so I tried smudging. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 14:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the whole thing. 06:47, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. Nice. <span style="">05:10, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Please work on this, Oakbreeze. 04:53, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I like the shading and I can't smudge it anymore...&#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 13:08, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

How are you smudging the earpink? Cause I know it can be smudged more in almost every program I've heard being used, so.... And I'm sorry, but the shading's not fine. Please darken and define it. 15:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 18:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. You can't tell it apart from the main pelt color. 20:14, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing Cloudy :P &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 20:20, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights/non-shaded parts. 20:02, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink? Also, this looks darker than the kit image. Are you colorpicking from the shaded areas? o3o 20:41, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more. <span style="">01:21, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

It's been 5 days, are you still working on this? 07:04, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oakbreeze said she'd take a break from PCA, so I'll take over if that's okay. <span style="">05:40, Mon, Feb, 20, 2012

It's yours. Just remember to reserve it, DJ. 03:11, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Egg (Lo) ~ For Approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlights and blur them ,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺<font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="4" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~<font color="orange" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">L <font color="yellow" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="green" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less flat; It looks like there are only highlights. 02:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Start to do all thing please "Expand the highlights and blur them", right? ,16:58,February 6,2012 (UTC)

His hind leg doesn't look completely shaded, the one on <-- that side. :3 22:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafstorm, I did expand the highlights and blur them. I always do everything the people tell me to =3 And I just realized the shading needs to be blurred... <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺<font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="4" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~<font color="orange" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">L <font color="yellow" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="green" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 02:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think that shading is too heavy.

Cheshire, you should be specific. Where is the shading too heavy? Honestly, I think the highlights could be blurred a little more, and blended with the shading more. Right now, you can clearly tell where the shading/highlights meet. When I use them (rare, but I still use 'em now =P), I try and make them flow together. 17:43, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk* I made this such a fail >.< 14:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

He's kinda starting to look an off-white ish color. Why don't you ask Mistypebble, the artist of Egg's apprentice image, for the pelt color? She probably still has the original file. 04:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, are you still working on this? 23:00, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the hauche shading. <span style="">01:23, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

D= Yes, I'm still working. I couldn't get on yesterday, sorry =( 11:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's about time <3 12:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his ears and head, and lighten and blur the shading. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't believe no one noticed he needed a torn ear... 16:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more thick and blur the shadings more. 18:47, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, do you mean thicken the line-art on the torn ear or make the torn ear go down deeper? 20:03, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should go back up with the ear, but just cut dont like a "v". This cut sorta looks like a "u". Sorry if that made now sense whatsoever Also could you blur the shading a bit? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on it Leafy? 19:51, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm... I didn't know, so I just thickened the line-art with what Leafstorm said (does that make sense?) Oh, Re-uploaded 20:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You thickened it a bit too much hun. Just remove the top layer of pixels and that should be good. ( I think) And smoothen out the shading more, so it doesn't look like it has a green tint. 00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart from the top of the torn ear. 03:01, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Socks (Lo) ~ For Approval
Ew, he's so ugly now that I made him D: Comments? <span style="">22:48 Sat Feb 4

Darken the base color. He looks gray. 22:52, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Was off his old loner image but ok. *Shrugs* <span style="">23:35 Sat Feb 4

It looks great :), nice job... I might blur the earpink just a little more Tiger  heart  ♥  23:42, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Reminds ne of my cat. 8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  02:21, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, next time, please do not just post compliments, post something constructive as well, unless there's been no other comments for 24 hours. Smudge the earpink a little bit more. 04:41, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ok Sweet, I know it's only a small thing but the white parts looks gray to me, can you lighten them a little please? 11:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think they're white, but if someone else agrees, I will change it. <span style="">18:24 Sun Feb 5

Let me give you a suggestion. Here's what I do. I shade the black part and the white on separate layers. That way I can play around with the opacity and everything, and so the black looks black, and the white looks...well...white.

Define the neck shading. 06:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:32 Wed Feb 8

Smudge the muzzle into the pelt. 21:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:49 Wed Feb 8

Can you blur the belly shading? 21:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. (IMO) <span style="">22:00 Wed Feb 8

Blur it a bit, Sweet. ^^ 02:19, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job~! ^^ Blur the ear pink a bit and smudge the back paw. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:07, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">01:57 Fri Feb 10

Blur the earpink a bit more. 21:31, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:49 Fri Feb 10

Define the "highlights" 05:05, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:01 Sun Feb 12

He looks just a tad bit more gray than black. Darken the base color? 20:08, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I would, but if I do than I have to darken the shading and than you won't see the lineart. <span style="">21:21 Tue Feb 14

Blur where the pelt meets the earpink a little. 21:56, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights. 23:40, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I don't use highlights, and I think it's fine. But I forgot to say Re-uploaded yesterday after Rowan's comment. <span style="">23:50 Fri Feb 17

Blur the shading a tad. Also, Sweet, if you want to darken the pelt color, take the burn tool over it. You can play with the rate, so you can choose how dark you want to make it. 8D He does look more gray then black, so please darken the base pelt color. 21:06, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't use the burn tool, I clicked a button on my gimp toolbox and it's gone. I can only dodge because when I go into Tools > Paint Tools > Dodge/Burn, it will only dodge. <span style="">19:14 Sun Feb 19

A problem happened in GIMP for me in the toolbox also. I think you can reset the toolbox by pressing a little button at the very bottom of the toolbox. It is a yellow arrow pointing to a blue box... I think that's what fixed my problem. 19:43, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Sweet, that's happened to me before, and if Ivy's way doesn't work, you can always go into Windows > Recently Closed Docks > Toolbar. :3 09:56, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh, oops, I thought there was something ON your toolbox that was gone. XD Never mind, do Mooneh's way. :3 16:04, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the black. Maybe lighten the base color so it shows up more? 03:03, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ruby (Lo) ~ For approval
Alright, there she is...anyone like? comments please! Thanks

Tiger heart  ♥  01:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading, make sure the ear-pink fill the ear capacity, and erase the pink that's spilling from the lineart 01:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less hotpink, make it the same as her kit charart. <span style="">01:44 Sun Feb 5

Sure I'll reupload it in a second Tiger heart  ♥  01:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Tiger heart  ♥  01:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is still not 50% complete. Suggesting for deletion again. Get this to at least 50% completiong before uploading this again. 02:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, I suggest you look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement and blurring  02:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Thank you -- Tiger heart  ♥  02:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and I looked at the tutorials (thanks, Ivy) Tiger  heart  ♥  02:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading and fix the pixels on the paws, fill 'em in. 03:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay; Re-uploaded --☯ Tiger heart  ♥  03:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) It looks like some of the lineart on the legs and belly are blurred, possibly erase the extra pixels around it.
 * 2) Make the earpink the same colour and smudge it.
 * 3) Fill in the grey pixels on her feet and tail.
 * 4) Blur the shading LOTS . 05:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Er. Instead of the file archive, could you post the actual image? 05:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Redone -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't upload a new file each time you change it. Re-upload it over File:Ruby.loner.png. 05:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to blur the shading tons. Try using guassion blur under filters. There are also white pixels on the front paw closest to us. <span style="">08:26, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

You also still need to post the actual image, no the archive of it. And I don't think this is 80% complete, so you have a week to improve it before it's declined I believe. 08:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There are light pixels on the front paw, shadings are only applied not blurred, blurred lineart, some colours (ear-pink) are on the places where they can't be- this is all things they are wrong.. fix that 11:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sp... I can't upload the new one I did for a week? :( I fixed the pixels on the paw... hm... Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:26, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You can upload it. What Paleh means is, the charart/image doesn't look 80% complete. You have a week to make it look 80% complete. Constructivly, post the file, not the archive. 23:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:37, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So if I upload it again, will it get declined? If it's not perfect (by people's standards) Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  02:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind. Misunderstood it. Re-uploaded -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

... =_= Use the female lineart, not the male. 02:58, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons still. i can help you if you wish. Also smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">06:14, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Redone... still need to do something about the shading, I believe, but I fixed the pixels, used the female blank, and blended the earpink -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --❦ Woo  patch of green  273  04:14, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to be lightened up a lot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  08:48, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Redone once again, and lightened *wink wink* ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  22:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. If I could, I'd change the heading to "For Approval", because it looks way better than it did the first time. 00:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart I reserved this a week ago-- 00:46, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Acorn, you already have Birdpaw up, and you can have one up for approval at a time. 00:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blurring the earpink... Thanks Moon! Thanks! ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  01:45, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks some of her tail got cut off, but it might just be me. :3 18:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, Tigerheart, I mentioned if I could change the heading, and it doesn't mean you can change the heading. Only a senior warrior and above can do that if they feel the image is at least 80% complete. 20:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry... *embarrassed* I'm really sorry. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:13, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading on the body. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:12, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded... You can barely see the changes I made but they're there... lawl. Woo patch of green  ❦  03:14, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please stop thumbing your image. All you need to say is "re-uploaded" when you upload the file. xD 03:16, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

okay sorry. It won't happen again... is this 80% by any Senior Warrior's standards? I would like to do another and I have the day off from school today, so I have a lot of time to do a charart. How long do I have to wait until someone can approve this? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Has there been any comments besides mine in the past 12 hours? Woo patch of green  ❦  17:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Be patient. There's blurred lineart on her back leg. 21:53, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll fix that Woo  patch of green  ❦  22:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  00:12, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stop changing the file to a url. And she's light grey, not dark. Just follow the apprentice tutorials and try to match the other images as closely as possible. 00:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  00:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the face and blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  08:30, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the kit image. The kittypet is too dark and should be tweaked. 15:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded and lightened the shading... a lot. ♥ V-day  I want sugar ♥    22:39, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Woo, stop thumbing it. Just leave the file code alone, it'll update on its own. 22:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I will. Can I ask a question? What does Under Evaluation mean? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:40, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, it means that the image you put up is under evaluation by the project. If you post an image that is over 80% (I think) finished then you get to put the heading "For Approval" and you get promoted to an apprentice!! I hope I helped...and blur the "highlights." 21:45, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for telling me, and am an apprentice. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:17, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 04:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  04:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Un-thumbed. Define the shading on the face and blur the earpink. 05:08, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the body shading. c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  06:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  15:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the lineart near the earpink, also define the belly shading. 23:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:03, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the head shading. 14:11, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart in the ear, waste under the tail, and a misplaced black pixle on her leg (I think). Also, please define the haunch and shoulder shading and lighten the shading on the face a bunch. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 17:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:03, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darn, it's not showing the new version I did. ! Woo patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading. And please stop putting the image in a thumbnail. Right before it says "overwrite file," there's another section that says "Thumbnail" or "Fill image" (something like that). And click full image. 00:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  03:39, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind. Reuploaded again, there were black pixels on the paws Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  03:41, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the base of her tail. 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded you can't see it very well though Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  04:25, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. If I'm correct you've already had a week to get it up to 80%+ complete right? Unless someone hasn't updated the heading. <span style="">05:47, Mon, Feb, 20, 2012

I know I'm not part of the project, but I wanted to give you some critique. Could you possibly define the shading and blur it? 05:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Yes, I do think I've had over a week... does that mean it's declined? :( Lalala... you say  I am messing with your head, yeah yeah... ♪ ♪  20:22, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'd think so...but this is at least 80% by MY standards. I say it stays up. 20:25, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you! Happy Clover Day  ♣  21:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tail shading was too dark Happy Clover  Day  ♣  05:49, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is 80% There is some blurred haunch lineart, can you fix that? 04:09, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sure I can; thank you... so much! Thank you all! Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 06:17, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 06:17, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job apprentice. :3 <span style="">07:30, 22, 02, 2012

Umm, Isn't WooWoo been an apprentice already? 00:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 02:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC) Nah, I'm still a 'paw. Thanks everyone! Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 02:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) ~ CBA
I like this one. Comments? 20:03, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the earpink. :3 22:38, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

He looks way too dark. I also used the burn tool several times, so please make the spots differing colors and not just one color. 23:10, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink has to be a little more visible ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  04:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, please stop repeating comments. 12:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Redone. Better? 02:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Lighten her more. Maybe don't have the flecks on the highest opacity. 02:36, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste right above the nose. 06:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add some speckles under the lineart instead of stopping before it along the spine please. Also I think there's a speck of waste on the front leg farthest from us. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shadeh, are you still working on this? 20:18, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. I've been busy. It'll be reuploaded soon. 21:29, February 13, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  00:05, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it's been a week. I'm taking over. 03:37, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Alright. That's fine. I'm really sorry about all this guys. 00:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded 01:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

This is amazing Ivy! Define the tail spots =P 01:44, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Smudge the earpink. <span style="">03:04, Sun, Feb, 19, 2012

Can you define the spots on the stomach a tad? 03:57, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely <3 Define the shading on both of the front legs. 06:10, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:17, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 00:54, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Soot (Lo) ~ CBA
Well...here she is...Soot! <3 Any comments? 10:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Define the earpink.

Woo patch of green  ❦  13:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken all of the shading. 15:33, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing. 23:50, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 11:48, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink just a little more, to match her kit charart Woo  patch of green  ❦  20:36, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whol eimage just a tad. 21:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry for the delay ^^; 08:34, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit and blur the shading a bit. 21:54, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 10:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gah, found some evil waste and killed it, reuploaded. 10:33, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the whole image a bit. I can barely see the lineart. 22:35, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on the left side of the lifted leg. 14:43, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :P There's no waste around the lifted leg, there was around the far right leg. 08:34, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a tad? I can't tell the difference between the lineart and the shading. 22:10, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/Smudge the earpink more to make it look more natural. 01:21, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lost the .pxd in a file re-orginization...so, redone with a waaaay more epic program :3 even though there's no change. 07:38, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oops, no wonder there was no change, I uploaded the wrong file x3 Reuploaded. 07:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 23:20, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt A) ~ For Approval
Here she is....I realize that the shading could be blurred more, and that I may have gotten the image name wrong, but I will fix that in a moment. Comments? 21:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The filename should be Ivypool.apprentice.alt.png. Just re-upload over this, and you'll be fine. Also, blur the shading. 21:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Cloudskye, for clarifying the file name. 21:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needsto be blended into the pelt a bit more. 23:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and define the nose pink. <span style="">23:53 Wed Feb 8

Define the tail shading. 00:03, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, but still have that "smudged earpink" look. <span style="">06:30, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Lighten the eyes up. They looks rather dark. 22:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes should be fine if you just reverse the depth. It looks better if you have the dark bit closer to the white shiny and the lighter bit at the bottom. <span style="">07:08 Fri Feb 10

The eyes should also be green, as she was mistakenly described with them. 11:48, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste under her chest and a speck of waste along the bottom of the image. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 12:35, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Turns out, I forgot to add the nose pink, and go over detail. I fail. I feel overjoyed. 21:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

If it's a gray cat, then she has a gray nose. Thicken and blur the shading a ton 05:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on this -> ear 21:55, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate the blur tool 02:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Tried the gaussian blur tool, yet? If not, then try it, 'cause I think the shading needs to be blurred more. :P 02:14, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I use gaussian for all my shading. Unfortunately, I'm having so much trouble with the shading. I use Pixlr, so I'm not really sure how to fix it. I 'll play around with it though. 07:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tell me if the back needs more blurring. If I'm right, then I live in a pineapple. 08:10, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch shading could use blurring 08:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:57, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail and haunch shading more. 22:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste along the tail. 02:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. -- Elork   04:15, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Here's what I did: I redid the image. I like how it looks now. 19:56, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear a bit, and add definition to the eyes. <span style="">02:34 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded. 08:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  13:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:04, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth in the eye and blur the shading...? 23:53, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. <span style="">01:30, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Reuploaded. She looks good.... 05:32, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more, and lighten the whole image. 09:21, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur the shading anymore, because it comes out all blotchy, and if I make it lighter, the shading is either too light or comes out funky. Anyone have any tips? 07:29, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Occasionally, when I can't blur the shading anymore, I add a new layer to smooth out certain areas (the haunch and chest/face in this case), or you could try to smudge the shading. 02:24, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well....I can at least say I tried. 06:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You need to blur the shading a lot and darken the ear pink then blur it. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 00:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) ~ For Approval
Bah, I dont think I matched it well. =.= 03:20, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh stripes moar :3 03:22, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice <span style="">06:32, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

Bloo.....you never added a date to the table.... I just saved your rear end there. I added the date you reserved the image. =P 22:39, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading a tad. 23:31, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little. This is lovely~ ^^ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 20:33, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Very pretty. :3  20:57, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

You workin' on this Bloo? It's almost been a week.. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽  00:18, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for keeping you guys waiting, I'll upload it as soon as possible 04:15, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:29, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

This looks so nice; define the tail shading just a little, at the tip at the bottom of the tail (underside of the atil). This is fabulous! Happy Clover Day  ♣ Woo  04:32, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

The tail tip shading is fine. 04:34, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his belly a bit more ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~  ☽  06:03, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo) ~ For Approval
I tried my best... First cat I uploaded myself. :3 Comments, please and thank you? 17:35, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad. This is wonderful, Thistle! =3 19:19, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! :'D 0:15, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Lovely! 05:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 06:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks so much, guys. :3 Defined tail shading and earpink. 16:01, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink into the ear, and define the shading on (her) right legs~ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 23:47, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 2:13, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading a tad. Nice ^^ 18:50, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Neck shading darkened. -salutes- 20:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the eye highlight completely white. It's a little darker right now. Other than that, I love it~! 22:12, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

You and your white. Reuploaded. 2:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Waste around the paws~ At least it wasn't about the white this time. :P  02:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

It's so pretty! Smudge the pelt into the earpink just a little to give it a more natural look Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  03:45, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ^^ 03:52, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred, smudged, and waste. Boom. 04:00, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shadin' on the face. 06:55, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Done. Reuploaded. 3:11, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit more. 14:40, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Done~ Reuploaded. 23:38, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the ear and define the shading under her tail ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 00:20, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste underneath the tail/around it.

I definitely see that now. |3 Reuploaded. (Oh, and Pouncy I don't understand what you mean by 'waste around the ear'. 2:11, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, it's gone.. o3o Define the shading along the lineart. It looks like it was blurred away from the lineart. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 06:01, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 0:32, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading. Also make it a bit more exact, it looks kinda smudgy now 03:05, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 5:19, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) ~ For Approval
<font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 04:42, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you place the scar more over her eye than it slanting over? Sorry if that doesn't make much sense. '-_- 04:47, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Gah.. the changes aren't showing o3o <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 05:10, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 06:02, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Changes still arent showing on my screen 8| <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 06:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image a bit. I can hardly see the lineart. Lovely, Fallow! 8D 07:04, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 07:17, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Fallow, you reserved two chararts. Were you given permission to? 17:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

She said that Paleh told her she could have up an apprentice and loner, which she does - Woody and Birdpaw. 17:27, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, Paleh gave me permission. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 18:48, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the scar just a tad? 23:54, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--  ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 00:35, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten her up. 00:45, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- I messed up the scar a bit *slaps self* ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 01:06, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Could you slant the scar more so its like directly above the eye? 18:27, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Alt.A) ~ For Approval
He was described as a fluffy gray cat. Comments? 17:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and define the shoulder shading. 17:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose a darker shade of gray unless he was said to have a pink nose. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 17:58, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it to the max. 18:45, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to all the belly and chest. <span style="">07:38, 22, 02, 2012

Reuploaded  I redid the shading, and I kinda like it better than the first. 13:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽  19:55, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt.Q 3) ~ For Approval
Iiiick... I hate this character. DX Ah, but I must forge on... comments? 18:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy~<33 Blur the shading on the tail please~ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 18:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  03:26, February 20, 2012 (UTC)


 * And blur it some. ♫Purplemoon♪   I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  21:35, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

 Re-uploaded. 14:07, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) ~ For Approval
Ooh, my third loner. And the last one. >:D Comments? 20:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shoulder shading. Lovely Mooneh ^^ 22:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly thicken the lineart on the color to match with the lineart of the loner. Wonderful! :3 22:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thankies :3 22:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a little more or smudge the fur into the ear a tad? :3 22:59, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and eye depth. Looks good, Mooneh! 06:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the long wait. I lost the .pdn (the original file with layers) so I couldn't mess anything up for a while. I have the .pdn on another computer, but it's an hour's drive away. I'm trying to get the file sent to me, so, don't say anything about fixing the tail shading, because I didn't. I just defined the eye depth. :3 11:32, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, maybe the color a bit thinner, the teeth a bit rounder (they kinda look like shark teeth) and define the shading on the neck, collar, teeth, and head. 03:06, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Alt Q2) - For Approval
Okay, so about 8 people watched me do her on join.me. All colours taken from her queen. Comments? 02:11, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the lineart from Goldenflower's alt queen, please. 02:13, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but that lineart's anatomy is just killing me. I think this looks more realistic. I copied almost everything from the longhaired. 02:16, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

The leg is pulled forward on the long-furred, and if you look in the file history of Squirrelflight I have the back of the foot the same as on Goldenflower, which I did following Breezey pointing out that a cat that isn't pregnant and in this position would be putting more weight on its legs, and so would have the back leg pulled in and tense looking, not splayed out. Also, please get rid of the flab line on the cheek. 02:20, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Everyone likez teh cats 02:35, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. All right, please don't comment on the shading, the markings, or the earpink. Comment on the lineart only. I don't want to have to redo the shading every time I change the lineart. I'll fix the shading once I get a good lineart. 03:06, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Mkay, move the back of the foot just a bit further back and change the hip joint back to how it was before. 03:12, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Since Shelly approves, go ahead and comment on shading etc. now. 03:43, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

There is some waste near the back foot, and can you define the shading on the two front paws? :3 04:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:38, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the white at the top of her arm closest to us along the line art on <---that side o3o At least that made sense in my mind...xD ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 01:48, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, that makes no sense to me. Elaborate a little more? 01:45, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oi xO I stink at explaining things. Okay, so on the fore leg closest to us, on the top of the lineart on <---that side, it looks like there's brown peaking through. X: ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 05:56, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I get it c: 12:24, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and blur the shading on the tail. 03:07, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:18, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder "highlight", and define the eye depth, and it should be ready. 05:42, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (A) ~ For Approval
<3 Frostfur. Comments? 02:18, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading <3 02:20, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is somewhat blotchy. Blend it into the pelt and together, and smooth/even it out.

The shading doesn't seem blotchy to me. However, it does need to be defined. 05:57, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I think I messed up the tail shading. Do I need to define the light source? 00:47, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and give it some volume, it looks kinda flat 03:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. D) - For Approval
He was described as bracken-colored on page one of Into the Wild. I took the colors from his other bracken alt. Comments? 02:27, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading and blur the tail shading. c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Everyone likez teh cats 06:50, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:58, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. ^^ 22:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Why not just blur the shading in general? xD 00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, lighten up the shading a bit. 01:04, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink 03:09, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (Ki) ~ For Approval
<3. All of his colors are from his leader (except the collar, of course). It was easy since the kit pose is close to the leader pose. :) ♫Purplemoon♪   I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  21:40, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Baww, such a cute little messiah. Define the ear pink, I think, and add shading to the bell. 21:48, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Changes Not Showing  ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:03, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Did you shade the collar? I can't see it quite well.

I shaded the collar. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:10, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the collar stick out on the ends instead of being connected with the lineart. There's a bit of waste along the left side (our left) on the edge of the collar. Lighten the shading on his tail, and define the shading on the collar to match the shading on his body. Also, could you make his bell smaller? ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 00:00, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded, Changes not showing again. ''' ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:19, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the collar shading a ton. 20:08, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's about as much as I can blur it without making it look messy. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  20:45, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and tone down the highlights. (only if you have them) 22:20, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights are fine. They have fine lighting, to me. Still, you need to blur the collar shading. 00:44, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around it... 00:59, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems a little inappropriate. When I did the leader, I tinted the shading red to add to the feeling of his flame colored pelt. Just click the transparency box on the layers dialogue and make sure it is the shading layer and bucket fill it with a very dark red ^^  01:14, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ki) ~ For Approval
Maple's was declined due to a lack of work. Comments? 23:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Awww adorable little furball! Define the light source.. <3 01:05, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink 03:10, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on at the top of the legs a little ^^ 06:18, February 23, 2012 (UTC)