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Petal's and Fox's Mother(Q) - For Approval
hai  19:47, April 1, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes seem kinda paintbrushy...blur or smudge them a bit?

Hmm, I don't know if it's texture or shading, but it looks blotchy. If it's shading can you blurr it please? ^^ 03:17, April 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I didn't do anything with the shading because I'm 99% sure that it's the texture. 21:47, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:25, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Shading's fine. It's plenty defined. 06:12, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Wonderful job, Duck c: 13:18, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry, and this has already passed 24 hours, but the stripes still look painbrushy, and the one on the back foot seems like a random stripe was just placed there. I don't think they can go like that... Of course, if I'm wrong, go ahead and approve the image, guys

Re-uploaded Smudged the stripes more, but I will more if I need to and I changed the back leg stripes. 14:26, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smudge/point the tips of the stripes on the back a bit more? 23:44, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

The way to have the stripes on the tail makes it look as though it's at an odd angle. Can you try to rearrange them, mainly the angle, so that it looks like it's curved toward us? 17:00, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Would anyone mind if I redid the stripes, they're giving me hassle and I wanted to ask first. x3 23:16, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

It's your image, and you don't have a pattern to match. Go right ahead~

Re-uploaded Looks so much better~ 21:32, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit, so that they look less paintbrushy? Bb un   legs  21:35, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? Also, you don't have to blur them, persay. Smudging would do the same thing, depending on how you smudge them. ^^;

Maybe also smudge or blur the lighter chest and face portion? It looks a little too straight of a line of fur, even for a shorthaired cat X3. 23:31, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I blurred the stripes, because Pixlr's smudge tool is a pain. x.x 01:22, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Can you give the stripes on the legs a smudge at the end to point the stripe tip a bit more, they look a bit paintbrushy 03:59, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Rainswept Flower (R) - For Approval
Changes may or may not be showing. I was going to give her black stripes, but when I played with the settings, this came out, and I couldn't bear to change it back. I tried doing this without colorpicking whatsoever, but the shading is giving me fits, ugh. That's what you guys are for, to help me fix it, heh. 01:07, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Can you darken or defing the shading a bit, I'm having trouble seeing it. 22:57, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could blur the pale stomach and back legs into the base pelt some more? 16:57, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Ivy? 03:09, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded yeh GIMP was giving me trouble with the undermarkings 16:40, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Adskjhf So pretty, Ivy! 8D CBA? 22:56, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but could you define exactly where the shading is on the tail, legs, and face? x3 23:07, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, honestly. It shows depth, which is what shading is supposed to do.

I don't quite understand the dark lines on her feet and lower legs. Is it shading that should be blurred more...? This is lovely, Ivy! 23:28, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

The dark lines on her feet are normal markings on brown tabbies, even my own cat has them. Don't worry, they're not random. I'll get on that :) 00:08, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a little? I'm having a hard time telling whwre it is : ) 04:40, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded  05:36, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Duskwater (E) ~ Withdrawn
I love her colors c: Comments? Bb un   legs  18:03, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the white, or the shading on the white. It looks a tad gray. Also, blur the back shading just a bit. Nicely done, she matches wonderfully.

Re-up. Ermegersh thank you so much Skye 8D Bb  un   legs  18:34, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a tad? 18:44, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  18:51, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Could you fix her light source? I honestly cannot see where it is coming from. 16:55, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Her light source is similar to Rosetail's and Snow Hare's, so I think it's fine. If anyone disagrees, I'll change it ^^;;. Bb un   legs  18:35, April 14, 2013 (UTC)

If it's coming from her front, than the entire front of the chest, along with her paws and tail-tip, should be in light. 01:54, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-up. I tried ;A; Bb  un   legs'''  16:30, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

Erm, may I go prod for some comments, please? It's been two days, so I believe I can go do so ^^;; Bb  un   legs  21:08, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Course. Try to blur/blend the shading in more, right now it's 'sticking' out too much. ^^ 22:52, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  23:00, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

It looks like there are darker portions of tufts of white hair on her belly that don't quite match the light source. Beautiful! So pretty...0.0 NYAAA *flies away*   23:37, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. nowadays it seems like we're always impressing each other XD Bb  un   legs  23:56, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Give the ear-pink a bit of a blur and, not quite sure how to explain this, it looks kinda off from the rest of the head. Maybe try and make the bottom of the ear-pink curve with the head or shape of the skull at the bottom. 04:01, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Sadly, I must withdraw her to work on a future project ;A;. However, if she is still there when I'm done with that project, I will claim her again ^^;;. Bb un   legs  16:19, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Rainleap (Star)- For Approval
Long overdue... because no one wanted hurr :3 23:14, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the faces stripes a bit more and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more? 23:53, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to be difficult, but I purposely matched Rainleap's face stripes, though they may be a little dark, to their blurring. If anything, I'd say they need to be blurred more. I'll change them if someone else says something :3 05:21, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

They're a touch too blurred and a little too dark. 16:53, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like pizza.

I think the chest and that little spot of shading between her chin and her shoulder could be blurred a bit. Nice! 01:26, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

I think her stripes may be just a little too dark. 03:25, 04/15/2013

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad? 22:18, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Iight, will be uploading when I can find time! :( seriously teachers need to know we like things other than school really 02:10, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:26, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to rush you guys, but it's been over 24 hours without comment and I really wanted to get in a good starclan kit image when the blanks come out, so critique? 05:57, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a little over-smudged at the ends, perhaps smudge them a tiny bit? 06:02 Sun Apr 21

Sorry Bloo, but you made absolutely no sense to m XD 05:43, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant over-blurred at the ends. 05:50 Mon Apr 22

Troutclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
- Sorry ;.; It looks bad. It was hard trying to copy Berru's design. It was also hard getting the shading and highlights to cooperate (don't get me started on the matted head thing x.x). I'm not the best at this =o=;; Anyways, comments/concerns? -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 22:32, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the elder more. Nice! Bb un   legs  22:35, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. Beautiful~ 22:36, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Beebs, how about instead of just saying make the stripes "match more", how about giving her suggestions as to how to match them? Anyways, Echo. This is really neat. .o. Perhaps thin out the lineart on the head, and add more of it?

Erase the waste, too? ^^ 22:43, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Removing waste is the bane of my existence now. -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 22:47, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe perhaps made the stripes match more by not blurring them as much? The ones on the elder don't seem to be blurred that much. Bb un   legs  22:49, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Define/darken the darker stripe of color on him, and I believe it is on the wrong side of the tail, too. (correct me if I'm wrong) 22:53, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Try making the mats look more like mats than spikes. I'd say google it, but that's painful to look at... Here's the least painful looking one I found. Matts are round clumps of tangled fur hanging off. And they'd be mostly on his cheeks, not his forehead, since there isn't really enough fur on a cat's forehead to matt up. I'd say his elder image should be tweaked for this as well. (gotta wonder if the Erins realize that a cat just can't live with matted fur... it rips their skin off... and sometimes kills them from either blood loss or infection... and cat in their right mind that's able to do it would groom this stuff off... no? just gonna have an elder known for matted fur on his face? kthen) 22:55, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

He's pretty cool! I like it. As for matching the stripes after unblurring them, darken them a bit, and they are smudged more than blurred. Also, he has a dorsal stripe down his back and tail. Last, the light color on his face wouldn't extend so far on his face, as he has dark stripes around his eyes. Again, great job! 23:15, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

I really like this guy! Define the tail shading a bit and also blur the shading a tad more. Nice, echo! 02:07, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

On his other images he has stripes also going the opposite way as the stripes are going now, blur the shading, he doesn't have a torn ear, and the elder and kit seem to have blue tinted shading. But nice work~ 02:24, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I pretty much edited this last night where I saw only Knight's critique, however, the only reason I didn't use a blue shading is because it looked odd when I did, so I changed the hue to black. -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 23:03, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste in between the paws and next to the ear on our left. Beautiful work, Echo! 13:53, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to fix that ;w; I really hate the transparency on GIMP -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 16:37, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

He's awesome, but needs to match the elder better. If you look at the elder, the stripes go in all directions, they're smudged, not blurred, the're shorter, and more plentifullol i love that word Also, this image seems a lot... shinier than the other images. Do the back stripe in the paintbrush without blurring, make sure it reaches all the way across his back, and on the tail the stripe is on the wrong side. otherwise, good job! 17:20, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely redid tail and back, hopefully changes are showing. -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 20:08, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Looks great now! Define paw shading? 23:07, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

The dark parts look more like shading. Could you also try to thicken the stripes just a bit? Good job other than that c: 23:20, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

This doesn't really match. The stripes way to blurred and are leaning the opposite direction that they should. They also need to be more jagged and defined. There's also a stripe running down the back, which I cannot see on this image. The colors are also too dark. I'd recommend color picking from the elder to match it. 20:38, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I'm so sorry you have to go through this the pattern is a butt I'm sorry If you like I can send you the elder's xcf - that has all the colours and opacities and all the fun stuff like shading tints and extra shading layers. 03:19 Mon Apr 22

Honeyfern (Star) - For Approval
Meh... Could've been worse, though I'm not sure I like her either.... 02:19, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

There seem to be specks of waste around the image. Holy crap, Scar. I like this. .o.

Re-uploaded 02:24, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Her other images seem to have more distinct stripes. Could you maybe make them match more? They also seem to be a bit lighter on her others, too. Other than that, a lovely image 8D 20:14, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Could ya' make the stripes a little less greenish to match the warrior? Bb un   legs  20:30, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:56, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

This is gorgeous, Scarfy! I'd blur the little whiskers that are in her ears a tiny bit :3 -- Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 21:18, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:24, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes on the warrior appear smaller and more defined. 20:35, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:39, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Smallear (Star) ~ For Approval
Well. Comments for improvement on Smallear? 12:37, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Beautiful<3 Shoon Derp Like  nobody's  around~ 13:04, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:07, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail highlight and blur the haunch shading. Bb un   legs  16:30, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define forepaw shading. smudge earpink a bit more. is the chest shading misplaced? lol his ears look hilarious 17:28, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Pretty~ i love the eyes<33 I'd thicken the shading on the haunch or add highlights o3o It looks sorta blotchy. --<span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 20:09, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The chest shading is actually in the right place; it flows with my light source. And it took me a while to get his ears to look decent, so saying they 'look hilarious' is kind of hurtful. @Bramblewind  18:29, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a tiny bit on the front paw, to our right? Shoon Derp Like  nobody's  around~ 18:39, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Future projects call~ If he's not been claimed after I finish my next project, I'll pick 'im up again. 18:52, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I've always liked this image. May I take over? 20:50, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sure! Would you like me to send you the file? 21:16, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, no, I'm good. Thank you though! 22:26, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fastest charart ever! I used the lineart I gave Cinder a while back. There was a comment then to make that right ear curve more, so I tweaked that. Suggestions for improvement for Smallear? 23:02, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a wee bit? I know it's artist's choice, but it looks darker than the other charart's shading. If you don't want to, that's cool with me. Bb un   legs  23:03, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blossomkit (Star) - For Approval
First white cat. Comments? 21:17, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC).star.png. 21:21, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

How? It won't let me. 21:28, April 21, 2013 (UTC)



Does it make sense taht i made more nicely? Spaniel78CP (talk) 22:23, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Span, it doesn't matter;Sorrel reserved it first, the image is her's. Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 22:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

In all honesty, I prefer Sorrel's image ouo;; Anyways, Sorrel, this is beautiful! It seems that there's a background or something outside the image. Couldja erase that? --<span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 23:22, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel, just re-upload it as a new file and mark the old one for deletion. 03:27, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Echo, she can't make her background transparent. Sorrel, if you'd like, once your image is approved, I can take care of that for you~

'Kay, sorry, but for what infinite reason can Sorrel not make the background transparent? It's a simple process that takes no more than a few minutes and is super easy to learn. It's ridiculous that she cannot make a transparent background considering the art she has done. I honestly do not think that this should be approved with the background like that. She needs to learn how to do it herself, it's not that hard. Add some depth to the eyes and define the tail shading a bit. 03:47, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

'teldy, it's Pixlr, not her. ._. It often does that for people. I've had that issue myself, honestly. No need to get snippy about it.

'Reuploaded' Alright, teldy. It's not my fault. Pixlr dosen't let me save so I have to copy paste it. This is a permanant problem, I'm afraid - so thank you, kelsey, do make it transparent once its approved. I've stated this background problem many times. >.< Renamed, eye depth and tail defined. 14:41, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Hatchkit (Star) ~ For Approval
... Well. I'm extremely happy with this. and I promise I won't withdraw this charart Comments? 21:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Do we even know that these kits died as kits? We know they're in StarClan... that's it. Not what age they died at. 06:47, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

If they're called "-kit" in StarClan, it's a pretty clear message they died as kits since the only cats to have aged in StarClan are Runningstorm, Wolfheart and Smallstar. <span style="">06:56 Mon Apr 22

And when is that? The cite for them being in StarClan goes to Vicky's facebook page where she tells someone that, yes, the SkyClan cats that were alive when SkyClan left the forest did in fact go to StarClan eventually. She doesn't name names. If they're seen as kits in StarClan, they need a cite for that as well. 07:28, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, then ignore me, I've not read any of the newer books yet, my apologies. <span style="">07:32 Mon Apr 22

Hollykit (NP) (Star) ~ For Approval
Shading was killing me. Comments? 22:14, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit? It looks a bit flat. 22:15, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''The shading looks dark because of the texture. 23:16, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Make the texture match the kit more? It's not as, erm, "mottle-y" as this texture. Bb un   legs  23:17, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sort of unsure about that. Usually, with the texture, if I put it at brush size 1, the texture won't show. I'm not sure I'f I can match much more. 23:19, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Good point on the texture. I'd say...perhaps sharpen it a bit, and that'll do the trick. Also, define the highlight/unshaded part on the legs, and there's a little waste on the charart by her tail. Lovely image! Those awesome eyes. *.* 23:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thank you, Knight. I could show you how, if you'd like. 23:48, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Mosskit (Star) - For Approval
My baby ;w; <3 22:14, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? It doesn't look so dark on the kit. Bb un   legs  22:59, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  23:07, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

White on paws, body, and tail are very gray 23:40, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

it's because of the shading, but if someone else thinks the white needs to be defined, I'll fix it. o3o 23:42, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Mosskit (Alt. Star) ~ For Approval
Comments? 22:46, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Erm, I think you forgot to add the date to the reserve. Anyways, define the shading a bit? Bb un   legs  22:49, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I just added it. I think the shading's fine, but if anyone else agrees, I'll change it. 23:02, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I think define wise it's okay, just lighten it on the chest a very small tad, please. 22:52, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:02, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree with Thistle. I think it should be defined a bit.

Mistkit (TC) (Star) ~ For Approval
00:10, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Webkit (Star) - For Approval
Comments for the little guy? Textures are a pain. <span style="">00:30 Mon Apr 22

Good god, this is gorgeous! Make the pupil more visable :3 --<span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 00:33, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Make the texture match more? It doesn't seem so..erm, spotted, if you know what I mean. Bb un   legs  00:33, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Echo~ <span style="">00:42 Mon Apr 22

Oddfoot-Kit~For Approval
Starclan, these blanks suck...

And the foot looks terrible too. And I'm not even gonna start on the shading...<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 11:00, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Can you match the stripe pattern more, and make his face, chest and belly paler, like the warrior? 15:00, April 22, 2013 (UTC)