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Bluebellkit (Ki) - Declined
I hate the shading. I couldn't get it to look right.

Hm..have you looked at the shading placement on the tutorial page? I have it pulled up and the shading for that is actually on the right side of the kitten image having the light source come from the left. Maybe try using that as an example. For an admin, this needs renamed to File:Bluebellkit.kit.png — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 03:17, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

that's only a general guide. there's multiple usable sources, and this source is fine. 06:19, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the neck shading and define the light on the tail

It's a little hard to tell since the image is so small, but I think I spy a bit of waste next to that right front paw. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:23, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded *Face palm* Shading still looks weird.

No, it doesn't. Just smooth it out a little bit near the edges of it and you'll be just fine. Also, be sure to sign with four ~'s, as you haven't been leaving a timestamp with your messages. You have a signature, but I can't tell what time you left said message, and that wouldn't be good for comments, CBAing, reuploading, ect.

reuploaded I think it looks better. 02:36, September 20, 2016

Shading looks nice, but some is leaking outside of the lineart(above the tail and some on the head). Songfire (talk) 15:14, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded I think this looks good.

Define the light on the legs? 15:25, 9/21/2016

The file is named incorrectly -- should be named File:Bluebellkit.kit.png with two 'l' 's in Bluebell.

blur(?) the body shading some more. 22:03, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 49:32, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more. 03:33, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:27, September 22, 2016

There's some waste around the image mostly on <== that side. 21:40, 9/24/2016

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 00:34, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded Thats about as much as I can smudge it. 33:36, September 27 2016 (UTC)

Lighten it and define the light on the paws. 17:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded21:01:13 30 September 2016 UTC

Smooth out the shading a bit more and define the light on the tail. 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste surrounding the <- paw. Songfire (talk) 21:49, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 18:45:20 5 Oct 2016 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front legs. 00:19 Fri Oct 2016

Define the shading on the tail, and maybe the belly shading should go up a bit along the side of the front leg, if that makes sense? Also, there is waste near the right front paw, I think. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:38, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading behind the front legs 17:31, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:05:25 8 Oct 2016 (UTC)

There's waste around <- half of the cat. 23:38, 10/08/2016

The shading is leaking on the tail, and also, there seems to be a random line of shading spanning over the legs? With your light source, the belly underneath would be shaded, or the line would be erased.

reuploaded It is impossible for there to be anymore waste. 18:3:18 9 Oct 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading on the back paw. Also, forgive, but there is still a tiny bit of waste by the front right paw (our right). At least I think so. 20:03, 10/09/2016

reuploaded

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the belly/side of the front leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:30, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

The tail looks sort of flat. either add more depth or add light.

reuploaded If there is anymore waste someone dies! 00:06:54 21 Oct 2016 (UTC)

That's uh. Really uncalled for. Even if it is just a joke :/ If someone sees waste, then you fix it. Simple. Don't joke about killing somebody. Ever. 00:53, 10/21/2016

Sorry. 00:34:22 22 Oct 2016 (UTC)

I can't see the earpink at all

Declined due to the one month limit. This image can be taken up by anyone with a free project. Garden, since you have reached that limit, you will not be allowed to reclaim this image for two weeks.

Voleclaw (star) ~ For Approval
On a scale from bad to bad, how bad is it? 22:32, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define tail shading--  23:14, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking around the image, and throughout it in general. Try looking at the category for approved StarClan images for an idea as to how the shading should look next to the lineart.

Could you expand the earpink? Songfire (talk) 04:16, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink and make the shading colour look more similar. Are you using a darker gray as a shading tint? I'm not trying to clamp onto your creativity, but black or dark blue works better as a shading colour. Also, I don't know if I should be commenting like I am on the highlights because I don't know much about the highlights but it looks odd. And also everything above. --

Theres nothing wrong with the shading color tbh. But could you blend the highlights and shading a lil more, please?  18:46 Wed Oct 5 

I just noticed a bit of waste by the eye. --

Expand the earpink so it touches the lineart, and the shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart in a lot of places, try and get it back against the lineart? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:25, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't have access my computer with the charart for a while >.< 21:10, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading, and maybe get rid of the patch of gray on her rear end. 20:17, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

There's some gray on its right eye (our left) - Jose1106 (talk) 23:15, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the lateness >.< 00:03, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart. 23:44, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be expanded so it touches the lineart inside the ear. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:34, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Actually, no, the earpink doesn't need to touch the lineart. That's just a style preference that many of us like to use, sorta like smudged shading, texture, ect. The same could be said for the earpink on the leader and apprentice blanks.

Reuploaded Redid the shading, is that what you mean by leaking (sorry, I'm clueless >.<)  00:23, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Shading that is leaking away from the lineart means that the darkest shading (aka where there is no light) is not touching the edge of the lineart. It's still leaking as before on the body and paws

Reuploaded Done, and oh my gosh I am an idiot. The color was much darker than it was on the page, so I changed it >.< 00:52, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body and tail. Also there is some leaking shading by the front paw closest to us, and some gray pixels on the right eye. 09:05, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

perhaps define the shading on the <-- side of the tail

Still working?

Downkit (Ki) - Declined
00:07, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Nice, but I'm pretty sure this has to be short-furred since she was a WindClan cat and (unless specified) we're supposed to make them short-furred

Downkit is described as having fluffy fur. Birdflight has fluffy fur, and she's longhaired. Fuzz is longhaired and has fluffy fur. Daisy has fluffy fur, she's longhaired, so does Echosong, Mousewhisker, Badgerfang, Clover, Cloudtail and Pixie. Anyways expand the earpink. --

Imo, the earpink is fine - it doesn't need to fill in the whole ear. But can you blur the chest shading just a tad? 04:27 Thu Oct 2016

All WindClan cats are to be short fur, and all RiverClan cats are to have long fur, unless otherwise stated within the series, or from the authors themselves.

Before I do any more work on this, I just want to clarify- is this character to be modeled as a shorthair? I used the longhaired model because of the mention of her fluffy, feathery fur, but would that not change anything? Thanks to all for your input. 06:23, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

No, keep her longhaired. If she is mentioned to have fluffy fur, then keep it fluffy. 14:35, 10/06/2016

I agree with longhaired, especially because she's named for the fluffy fur. 15:39, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Yep. Keep her fluffy. But as I said, expand the earpink next time you reupload. --

Reuploaded. Fluffy it is! But please avoid repeating comments, and I agree that the earpink is fine, it covers almost all of the ear. 22:42, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading? 00:15 Fri Oct 2016

Down feathers are soft feathers on a newborn/premature owlet/other birds. They are not long feathers. In fact, they're soft and kinda short, since the birds aren't all that big as babies.

Reuploaded. May as well- defined tail shading. Again, before I do more work on this... not longhaired, or longhaired? 23:04, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

i'd have to disagree purely because she's named for it. we've given longhairs to cats that've been called fluffy but not longfurred (mousewhisker, pixie, hazeltail, etc) but if ppl go with shorthaired from here I won't argue further. 23:08, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Given my extensive research on down feathers (which was more like 10 minutes or so), I've come to the conclusion that down feathers are in fact short and fluffy. So, it would have to become shorthaired. 23:15, 10/07/2016

Reuploaded. Fluff is gone- well, it's shorter. Fixed leaking some shading pixels too. 22:51, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

I don't know if I'm just struggling to see the earpink against black fur but the earpink seems to be leaking onto the forehead.

I think the fur should be darkened a lot more, and the hightlights seem to be a bit too intense, if those are highlights. 13:33 Sun Oct 9

Reuploaded. Darkened image, smoothed highlights, fixed earpink. 02:50, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

May I please have some comments on this? :) 23:54, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

The shading seems kind of splotchy to me, smooth it out and define it? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:36, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project space may take over.

Sunfish (Star) - CBA
could you rename this file into File:Sunfish.star.png beacuse I'm silly and forgot to change the name :/ 18:52, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Moved. Can you define the light on the face and smooth out the shading on her body? 15:55, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry, but I can't smooth the shading more 16:34, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Why not? I think you can smooth it out a little bit more.

Reuploaded 21:18, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading up onto the right edge of the right ear, and onto the inside of the ear? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:37, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Still working?

Reuploaded yep :p 15:56, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Meadowslip (Star) ~ For Approval
22:57, October 10, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the shading isn't spread out over the main body enough, could you spread that out some more. define tail shading —  Minkclaw   14:22, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload  19:13, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking behind the elbow^^

Reupload 22:32, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth on the head/neck/chest area? 15:11, 10/14/2016

Reupload 23:50, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the legs and chest? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:18, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading more up on the chest, and define the face shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:40, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 19:38, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the left leg? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:34, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 02:07, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define/add the shading on the chest.

Reupload 03:02, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 03:09, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the left foreleg/shoulder just a tad. Looks very nice. 20:29, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Pricklekit (star) ~ For Approval
Why such a cruel name?Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:34, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws and tail.

Reupload <font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  22:26, October 14, 2016 (UTC)

What's wrong with the name Pricklekit? :P Anyway, darken the shading a little, and I think it should reach up higher on the right edge of the front leg/shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:42, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I don't see it as a cute name. I think it stems from the medicine cat called Prickleface, who was said to have a fitting name.O.o <font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  07:58, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think there would be at least a little bit of shading in <-- ear, even if the light's on it, since a cat's ear isn't a flat object.

doesn't he have a tabby pattern on the brown? I can't see any on the brown.

Still working?

Birdsong (Star) - CBA
tried to take colors from the other image, but they're probably off by a little bit.

Make sure the white ring on <= eye follows the white on the elder. Also, I'm pretty sure I have the file if you need it. <span style="">21:50, 10/11/2016

Reuploaded

Comments?

The shading on the chest looks kinda blocky. - Jose1106 (talk) 01:02, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Judging by how the elder looks, it appears that the white goes on the entire arm, kinda like what I did with Splinter's rogue.

on the other image, I think the stripes are not that "round" on the tips. (sorry if this is confusing)

Reuploaded

Comments?

CBA?

Carpkit (Star) - For Approval
Precious little one. ;.;

If I'm not mistaken, his description says he has a white belly and muzzle, not white belly and paws. - Jose1106 (talk) 23:19, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That was me mixing up the descriptions for him and Marshkit. Anyways, I redid it, since I wasn't too fond of the previous pattern.

maybe define the shading a little bit? 19:51, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hey, look, I finally get a comment...... almost a full week later. =/

Frogleap (Star) ~ For Approval
why do I try. I colorpicked from the warrior. <span style="">14:26 Sun Oct 16

Can you darken the shading overall? - Jose1106 (talk) 16:22, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">19:30 Sun Oct 16

can you add more eye depth?

re-ups <span style="">22:21 Thu Oct 20

Comments, anyone? <span style="">23:30 Mon Oct 24

Featherstorm (Star) ~ For Approval
<span style="">16:39 Sun Oct 16

Perhaps smooth the pale part just a tiny bit on the face, and define the earpink in the --> ear

I think she looks a little bit crosseyed. 15:14, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry it took so long. <span style="">23:24 Wed Oct 19

Comments? <span style="">00:01 Sun Oct 23

For lack of better words, on the other images the stripes seem to be softer on the edges, but are defined in where they end? There seems to be some smudge marks between the stripes on this but idek. Also from the way the others look, the pale should be fully up the legs, meeting with the belly. The base on this also seems very slightly darker than the others, but that might just be me.

I'm confused on what you mean for the stripes... are you saying I should smudge it more? Also, the pale is only on the back of the legs (see the queen, for example), and because of the way the paw is tilted and how it looks on the queen image, I thought that the pale would probably be seen on the edges. <span style="">23:01 Sun Oct 23

I meant perhaps get rid of some of the larger smudge marks between the stripes. And for the pale, I was told the same for the white on Birdsong's Star image, because of the pale that is on the underside of the legs on the elder image (on which you can see it go up to elbow).

Re-uploaded Idk if this is what you mean but hopefully it's better. <span style="">03:12 Mon Oct 24

Plumclaw - Declined
--  17:09, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Waste is surrounding the whole image. - Jose1106 (talk) 17:11, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Can I have a redline please? --  17:19, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Here's your redline. Also, the lineart is blurred in places, and the earpink color doesn't seem to match the other images. Shading is leaking along the body, and also I can't see it on the <-- half of the tail.

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free space may take over.

Lakeshine (Star) - CBA
I kinda failed 17:53, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Um,any comments? 10:55, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Oatkit (Star) ~ For Approval
This is my first time using a different color besides black for the shading and using a different shading technique. Comments? - Jose1106 (talk) 19:50, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and the eye depth? Cute! 20:16, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! - Jose1106 (talk) 21:21, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a little bit more. 20:53, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 21:47, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and sharpen the shading 07:25, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

the shading should be darkened too. try using a very dark red

What does define ear-pink mean? - Jose1106 (talk) 12:57, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

It means that you need to pick a different color from what you already have to make the earpink more visible. 09:10, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded completely changed the shading. - Jose1106 (talk) 19:32, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Um, as for me earpink is a bit too neon, so could you try just a darker, grayish version of the color you used? Also, add some shading depth to her shoulder. 12:29, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 14:16, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the dapples a bit? I can't really see them at all. 19:50, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Her description says she has vert faint dapples. - Jose1106 (talk) 20:38, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

I know it does. I can't see them at all. 21:01, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Could you perhaps smooth the shading on the flank?

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 21:10, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Flykit(Star) ~ For Approval
Comments? Trying a new tint

Nice! Maybe smooth out the shading on his flank? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:38, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Where's your light coming from? Because if youre using the source I think youre using, the chest and the top of the paws shouldn't be in shadow.  <span style="">06:37 Tue Oct 18 

The shading should be blurred a lot more, imo. <span style="">22:03 Tue Oct 18

Reuploaded Think I fixed what you were talking about. I took my source from a different image, but that one might be wrong so I swapped the facial shading to make it match a different placement.

Comments?

Duckkit (Star) - CBA
not entirely sure whats meant by 'straight tail' so I gave him a long shorthaired one like his father 21:18, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Is it just me or does it look like he has thicker lines on his front paws? 15:06, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

it's darker fur. my own kitten has it and she's a brown tabby as well. 15:09, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the depth in the eyes? Also, did you base this off of Jinkies?

reuploaded nah different stripe pattern + this would need a squirrelflight tail 17:41, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Nightwing (Ki) ~ CBA
Comments? 22:36, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 15:26, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Waterkit (Star) - CBA
06:43, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the white on the right paw and on the tail-tip? They look a bit solid to me. 15:11, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:10, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

Could you make the colour a bit more ginger? It looks more like light brown to me. 07:13, October 20, 2016 (UTC)


 * Ginger is a relative term that the artist can interpret as whatever they'd like until otherwise specified. I've definetly used dark palets for ginger images 07:24, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

can you add some shading depth to the chest?

Re-uploaded 05:56, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Wetfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
Kudos to Beebs for this pattern, though. I tried. <span style="">14:20, 10/20/2016

maybe smudge the spots just a little bit more. 19:54, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the body a lil'

Hickorynose (Star) - For Approval
Not entirely sure how I feel about the shading, what are your guys's critiques? 02:50, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the legs, especially <= one? <span style="">15:38, 10/21/2016

the shading by his tail on the body seems a bit hard edged right by the lineart. 19:52, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Petaldust (Star) - For Approval
I am still so not adjusted to my schedule, but I couldn't resist making an image just to break up my time...I will only be on still to reupload and not checking more than once a day so email is still the best way to reach me. <span style="">00:40 Mon Oct 24

The shading looks a little hard-edged on the left shoulder and the tail. Can you smooth it out just a little bit? 20:31, October 24, 2016 (UTC)