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Nightwing (W) - Tweaked
Shading and earpink tweak. OA was Icy. 04:44, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

She looks sort of a blackish/blueish right now, though it may just be may computer... o3o 18:07, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

That was on purpose. She's tinted slightly blue to blend the shading together more. 07:33, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and make the earpink maybe one shade lighter to match the queen, please. x3 15:36, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's that? x3 04:31, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks a bit blotchy. Maybe make the "highlight" on the haunch a bit bigger 03:34, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Meh. x.x 03:50, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) - Redone
I asked Cloudy in chat and she said that I could redo this, because I was having trouble. OA was Stoney, and it needed to be lighter. Comments? x3 04:14, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 04:16 Thu Nov 22

Darken it just a tad, as well. There's also waste around the entire image.

Re-uploaded: Pixlr's wand tool is a pain. x3 04:25, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit flat in my opinion. Can you define it a bit more? 20:45, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Try and smudge the ear-pink in more than one place; it looks kinda odd with just one smudge, and blur it a touch 03:43, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:44, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

The light part of the legs needs to be defined more  18:48, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:06, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on < side. 23:36, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think that it's fine, it's just the shading, but if another person agrees I'll change it. x3 13:15, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (A) ~ Redone
OA was the beautiful Tatum. Comments? 02:41, 24, 11, 2012

Can you make the stripes match Berry's image more? Maybe add the stripe of black that goes from his head down to the tip of his tail? 18:26, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, stuff has come up and I can't work on this anymore. Withdrawing. x.x 03:13, 26, 11, 2012

Taking over; re-uploaded omaigawdthisfailsosbad 08:32 Mon Nov 26

There be waste~

Re-uploaded 09:14 Tue Nov 27

Define the shading and make the stripes ever so slightly less messy to match. 20:42, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (A) ~ Withdrawn
OA was LeafstrikeAsakura, and I moved teh eye. 10:15 Sat Nov 24

Is there a way you can add a little depth on the missing eye? 05:35, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

I created it the same way the missing eye was before, but if anyone else agrees, I'll do so. 05:36 Sun Nov 25

I agree with Breezy. 08:38, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken the pupil a little. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:17, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Webfoot's elder. 05:48 Tue Nov 27

Brambleberry (MC) ~ Redone
OA is Echomist, with a tweak by Ivy. Redone for multiple reasons. (meh I don't like this, I think I might redo it)

Expand the shading on the back of the shoulders a bit. 05:34, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing image and giving her to Ivy.

Reuploaded Alrighty...how's this? I incorprated parts of Cloudy's design and made a furry effect. I love this :D 06:37, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her a lot, she's still very gray. 08:36, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can only lighten the shading so much before she looks flat, so is this better? =) 18:50, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

If you're redoing it and want a bit of realism, I'd add in a few stripes since spotted cats always have stripes. But that's just me, no need to take my advice. I'd say add a second layer of shading to give it more depth. 19:05, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

She's still pretty grey. Maybe try expanding the highlights? 22:07, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shelly, I would, but Rain's to-be tweak nomination to have stripes because she was flecked was declined, so I don't know if everyone would be ok with her having tabby points. 19:28, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather her not have the tabby points. In the only official artwork we have for her, she's shown /without them/, and from what I remember, they're totally optional here. Now, onto the image itself. This is beautiful... but can you define where the ear pink is? It's kinda hard to tell.

Reuploaded  19:46, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Snowtuft (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, Mintstarr, and Insane (I think). Shading needed defined, colors needed to match, so on and so forth! 06:51, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

There is a tiny bit of waste by the tear in his ear. Also, just a suggestion, could you get rid of the torn ear, since the rogue's ear isn't torn? 18:16, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

The rogue image should match the warrior. ._. And since I still have the file for the rogue, and torn ears require no tweak nomination, I'll take care of it.

Reuploaded  19:25, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (A) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading a bit. OA was Leafstrike. 10:47, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

I looks like the highlight from the shoulder kinda runs onto the chest, could you darken that? 22:08, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:57, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (E) ~ Tweaked
I tried. 00:15, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 00:20, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think this is supposed to have scars. x3 02:56, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'll define the earpink in a bit. Assumign that she's lost the eye, there's bound to be some kind of bare skin around the socket..if someone else thinks I should remove it, I can. 03:12, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. If no one objected to Rain having scars around his missing eye, then this should be fine. 11:48, November 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I defined the earpink. 05:20, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (E) ~ Redone
The apprentice is so much better than this, but hey, another elder~ 8D OA was Wildy, redoned for stripe issues. 09:15 Tue Nov 27

changes are here if you can't see them  09:18 Tue Nov 27

Macgyver (KP) ~ Redone
Was redone due to multiple issues. I think the OA was Ashshadow with a tweak by Rowan. Anyway, I absolutely adore Macgyver's pattern<3 23:03, November 27, 2012 (UTC)