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Firestar(A) ~ CBA
Here he is. Not my best. Comments? F i r e s t a r ! Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think he should be short haired. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make him match the leader image. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur his markings more and define the shading. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 02:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I made him short-haired and I'll do everything else in the morning. F i r e s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. RE-UPLOADED. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match the leader better. <span style="">00:55 Sat Dec 10

And blur where the belly meets the ginger. 02:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna withdraw this. I'm not quite ready for Firestar yet. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I'll reuploaded this ASAP. 17:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Sandstorm. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  17:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay I re-did the stripes the best I could and I also tweaked a few other things. 17:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the stripes, belly, and earpink, and make the stripes match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded okay I color picked off of his leader image and I did my very best with the stripes. 18:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the belly to the pelt. 18:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded I smudged it a touch too. Changes not showing. 18:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

You probably took the colors from the shaded part of the image, cause the stripes are still too dark. Lighten them. And they don't really match the leader image still.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the non-shaded part of the image. Okay, I looked at the Firestar leader image and I mached it to the best of my ability okay? It matches it the way I see it. 18:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the stripes sharper at the ends. 19:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pale belly come to a point instead of being round at the top  19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry, but it doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">23:06 Sat Dec 10

Add shading and highlights. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, she just has to add shading. She can add highlights if she wants to, but it's not necessary. 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sorry.

Reuploaded Okay Ivystripe gave me a redline. Better? 18:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, Firestar ;3 And yes, Better Sandstorm. Define the shading even more and blur together the markings. 18:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Give all of the credit to Ivystripe. 19:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading more and the stripes still need to be lightened a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stripes fail :P 01:29, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to make it look like the other images and blur the shading so that it blends more into the unshaded parts. 01:34, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Those are the right amount of stripes. I should know since I did all but his leader image (if I had done the leader I would have done the stripes differently) 01:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you for referencing Ivystripe 02:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Alright. Blur the lighter part of his fur a bit more. 02:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 23:37, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Umm nobody's commented in three days... bad? 21:45, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Defione the stripes, blur and darken the shading, and smudge the ear pink into the pelt. 00:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

All right, this definitely isn't enough stripes... Also, the stripe closest to his back leg shouldn't be curved. 00:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay ivystripe gave me that redline so.. Take it up with her >_>;; I'll reupload this tomorrow anyway. 03:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Eww >_> 00:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink to make it look more realistic. <span style="">18:32 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Is that better? 20:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading into the pelt. 22:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading please. <span style="">16:14 Sun Dec 18

Reuploaded >_>;;; 17:16, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I have an issue with that stripe closest to his back leg. I looked at this "redline" Ivy gave to you and it's not nearly as curved on there. Fix it. In addition, the eyes should be a brighter green. 00:19, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used layers and re-did it :D 01:56, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink by making it paler and make the stripes pointier. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:59, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail >_< 03:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a pale underbelly and everything should be lightened. 16:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  21:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh underbelly color fail >_< 01:41, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the underbelly and brighten the whole thing, his leader is positively flamey :3 Also, define the "highlights". 03:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the belly more pale orange, less yellow. 20:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Either I have bad eyes or the shading needs to be darkened. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:40, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I just darkened the shading just a bit because somebody else told me to lighten the hole thing. 02:47, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The image just needs to be more flame colored but do that without changing the shading, the shading is fine. 16:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Featherwillow, defining the highlights is pretty much brightening them, and some user don't even use highlights like me, because highlights are artist's choice. 17:02, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Stoneclaw, I took all of the colors from his leader image so, I'm not gonna change it. 02:04, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights on the face (and if you don't use highlights, then where the shading isn't). I'd put a patch of light on the back, it'll help lighten the color without having to change it. Blur the pale belly and make sure it goes all the way along his belly; it looks like it stops about 3/4ths of the way there. <span style="">00:47 Fri Dec 23 00:47, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the tip it, looks better now. 02:22, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, brighten the whole image, and make the belly color match the leader. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:57, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the legs. They appear brown and not like the rest of him. Breeze whisker  03:12, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wait doesn't Firestar have more stripes than this? Or is this just because of the way the apprentice is set up? 19:27, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded I didn't lighten teh legs much because the shading is centored on the back. And Cinder don't comment just to ask a question, okay? 19:30, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpen the tips of the stripes. And Cinder was actually fine, she was asking a question about the image. Basically asking "Shouldn't this have more stripes?" and no Cinder, despite how it looks, the amount of stripes is fine. I know it looks like less though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:15, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oops sorry, Cinder  16:38, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. <span style="">02:24 Mon Dec 26

Reuploaded I like this. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  18:21, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate him, he's not the right colour. 17:09, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

...Umm I don't have that tool on pixlr... and I took the colors from the Leader. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:43, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the belly. Breeze whisker  15:54, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the bellyfur and the big stripe on his back. 22:54, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's not a tool. It means make the whole image brighter. And redden the earpink a ton till it matches the leader image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for making me more of a n00b, Paleclaw xD  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  17:36, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

The colours still don't really match the leader/deputy etc. so match that. <span style="">01:11 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded kay I had to redo it so the colors match. I took everything from his leader. It only looks darker because of the shading. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:07, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Define the "highlight" on the shoulder. <span style="">22:01 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  23:25, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading overall? Just a smidge, about 10 more up if you use layers 00:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't darken it too much so it matches the leader more. I had it right next to me to compare. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks too undefined but if it matches his other images then it is ok. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:52, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's from his other images. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  03:53, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Frankly, I'm of the opinion that his images need to be redone, since there's very little that's realistic about them, but that's just me. Anyway, looks fine. Matches his other images. CBA? 16:27, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ For Approval
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. <span style="">07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 00:22, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And smooth the shading too. It is blotchy in some places. <span style="">05:47, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Make the color match the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and tone down the highlights if you use them. Breeze whisker  21:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Starforce? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If Starforce isn't, may I work on this? 01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, not yet. It hasn't been a week. They get a full seven days. 02:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading. -- 00:11, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Starforce gave me permission to do this. I'll reupload ASAP 14:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail :P 01:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" tons, it needs to be lighter, and seriously smudge the earpink down. :3 03:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There's no highlights' to define. Add highlights to the face and front haunch. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:30, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image so it matches the MC better, darken the shading, add shading to the herbs, and take the earpink color from the MC. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:40, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the eyes match the MC image... they look red. 01:32, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

A big chunk of the earpink is missing so fix that, and define/darken the shading. May just be me, but can you make the herbs different colors or is that unneeded? a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:43, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did I hated it so I just re-did it. 03:03, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and lighten the color of the eyes. 16:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

In his description it says he has long, feathery whiskers. I think his whiskers should be longer and he should get an extra whisker but I'm not sure. 18:34, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and add some depth to the eyes. I agree with Mountainheart on the whiskers thing :3 <span style="">21:41 Wed Dec 21

Reuploaded I didn't add an extra whisker, I just made it longer like the MC image. 02:09, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged/blurred part of the ear closest to us. It also looks really dark, but if it's the same color picked off his MC image, then don't change it  04:19, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add the shading to the back leg farthest from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:34, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I just earsed all around the ear just to be sure and I took the ear pink from the other image. 00:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 01:08, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes aren't showing. 02:27, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, lighten the earpink to match the MC, and make the eyes more yellow-orange (amber) and less plain orange. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:55, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the eye color from the MC 17:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="">23:44, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Reuploaded 20:56, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Make the eyes less red. Moonstorm88 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the MC. 22:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You took it from the wrong part. That's the shaded part of the eye. Take it from the middle color, not the darkest or lightest one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:13, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste on the outside of the front paw to the cat's right. <span style="">00:11, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Reuploaded Okay I killed teh waste! >:D 16:46, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, lighten the eyes and take the earpink from the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:14, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the ear pink and the eye color from the MC. I hope it looks better. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  18:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Blur the shading more and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also blur the highlights if there are any. 22:56, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  17:42, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear, make the shading more consistent, and define your light source. <span style="">10:50 Fri Dec 30

Define the highlights and perhaps lighten up the ear pink, or make it more red. The ear pink looks a bit brown to me. 18:33, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I dont use highlights, Dapple. And I re-did it becuase the shading was bugging me. Comments? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudged earpink. <span style="">00:01, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Reuploaded  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  02:10, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bum and smudge the earpink into the ear more so it looks like fur sticking into the ear. Also lighten the earpink a tad. <span style="">22:07 Sun Jan 1

'Reuploaded The shading on the bum is supposed to be that light because of my light sorce, but I did darken it a little bit. The ear pink is now taken from the MC  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  23:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the rump and tail shading. <span style="">01:24 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded okay that's it's blurred as I could get it on pixlr  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  02:36, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose and add shading to the herbs. I'm sure you can blur the tail shading a bit more. <span style="">01:42 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded Comments? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ For Approval
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? <span style="">23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. <span style="">00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. <span style="">00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) <span style="">23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. <span style="">21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD <span style="">00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Doesn't everyone? ;) <span style="">23:22 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading and the highlights. 01:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and no offence, but the shading is blurred enough and to the max. <span style="">11:08 Thu Dec 15

Darken the shading, on the rump especially. And have you tried Gaussian blurring it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always use gaussian blur for shading. <span style="">00:56 Sat Dec 17

Darken the shading and blur it 22:07, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want to darken it, because it will turn out black. <span style="">22:13 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:07 Sun Dec 18

Darken the shading and blur it. Make sure you're using the pencil tool when you're drawing on the lineart for the torn ear, as right now some of the pixels are semi-transparent. <span style="">01:22 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded I did use the pencil, but I erased some of the ear off first. That's probably why. <span style="">18:56 Tue Dec 20

Darn it. I was hoping to get this once Bluestar's kit alt. I'm working on was approved, but, oh well. Anyways, this looks a little too gray, with not enough blue, to me. Bluestar11796 19:02, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe I wanted it too, so as soon as Frostfur's loner was approved I quick reserved it. I colour picked off one of her other image, so I'm not comfortable about changing it. <span style="">19:12 Tue Dec 20

Define/Add shading to the farthest back leg. It is in the apprentice tutorial shading placement. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:37, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is the artist's choice, as long as it makes sense and there is a definite light source. Plus, I'm pretty sure there are other tutorials that show the shading a different way. I don't see anything wrong with the shading, except fo the fact that the the neck shading looks too black. <span style="">4:29 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Oh, add depth to the eyes. <span style="">4:31 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Add shading to the back leg farthest away from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:18, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is depth in the eyes, plus it's my choice anyways, and the shading placement is my choice, and it's fine. <span style="">17:19 Wed Dec 21

Can you try to match the nose color with the other images? It just looks a little bit off to me. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:54, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It is off her leader image. So I don't intend to change it.<span style="">21:49 Fri Dec 23

Blur the smudged earpink. <span style="">23:47, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

I don't blur apprentice earpink, only smudge. :3 <span style="">01:29 Sat Dec 24

Sweetflower, I know you don't blur the earpink but it needs to be blurred, at least just a little. You can't blur by smudging of smudge by blurring. ;) Also, darken the shading on the hindleg farthest to us, and maybe lighten the shading on the flank just a tad. This is lovely. :3 22:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I caved. :D Just for you Stoneh! :P <span style="">03:11 Mon Dec 26

Make the highlight/lighter bit bigger on the face, and make all the highlights/lighter bits brighter. Also, make the belly completely shaded, chest and back foot farthest from us. And blur the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. I re-did her, she looked awful. <span style="">17:41 Wed Dec 28

I don't think changed are showing. <span style="">17:45 Wed Dec 28

Define the shading. I like this one. <span style="">01:55, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

(Just wondering) Can you see the changes? 'Caus eI can't. <span style="">02:15 Thu Dec 29

I think I can. thicken the lineart on the ear, and either add or brighten the highlights so it matched the leader image. Also, make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:41, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think you can see it Paleh! <span style="">18:55 Thu Dec 29

It's been 20 days, I think it's time this was CBA'd ._. 23:49, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be a nitpicker, but the slit in her ear needs to be sharper and the shading needs to be blurred more and darkened a tad. <span style="">10:52 Fri Dec 30

Re-uploaded. Nah, it's ok Wildheart. <span style="">17:12 Fri Dec 30

Restarting CBA. 22:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

O.e Ugh...So sorry but the highlights still need to be brightened a lot, on the leader image, they are like...silver. Bluestar is hard to do, I know, I tried tweaking the warrior version but I failed.... -- 17:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

o.e I don't use highlights. But if I have to add them I will.<span style="">19:48 Sat Dec 31

I agree with Stoney. You either need to add highlights or lighten the base colour a bunch and keep the shading at the same opacity it is now. <span style="">22:09 Sun Jan 1

Re-uploaded *Sigh* I didn't want to mess around with highlights, so I lightened the base colour. <span style="">02:18 Mon Jan 2

Still needs to be a bunch lighter. Check the leader image for reference. <span style="">02:01 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. <span style="">02:39 Tue Jan 3

Fix the nose, the shading placement looks off too. 20:39, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

The nose if fine, and the shading placement is my choice. <span style="">01:36 Wed Jan 4

Make the lineart completely black (not semi-transparent as it is now), blur the shading, and darken it. Make sure the shading extends to the lineart on the places where there aren't supposed to be "highlights". <span style="">01:44 Wed Jan 4 Re-uploADED. <span style="">02:10 Wed Jan 4

The blue seems too blue. Try to match it with her other images. Nice job! a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (A) ~ CBA
Got all colors from original image. CommentS? 23:15, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">23:20 Mon Dec 12

Re-Uploaded. 23:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and darken it. <span style="">01:09 Wed Dec 14

Re-Uploaded. 01:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlights. <span style="">23:58 Wed Dec 14

I can't; then it won't show. It looks fine as it is. 22:51, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the tail shading and blur the haunch shading? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind leg. 20:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Its blurred as much as possible. 01:28, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and erase the waste. <span style="">12:21 Sun Dec 18

Re-Uploaded. 22:53, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading more and brush up on your placement, as right now I can't really see a definitive light source. <span style="">01:33 Tue Dec 20

There is a definitive light source. Its coming from the top/front right side. I copied the shading from Frogleap's apprentice image, and no one found anything wrong with the shading there. I'll darken the shading more, but thats as much as I'll do. 22:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I've defined the shading. Everything's blurred to the limit, and the shading seriously matches Frogleap's perfectly, and that one was approved, so I'm going to CBA this. 23:09, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink does not seem to match up with his kit image (kit not alt. kit) a cat  ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Be sure to change the title next time. ;) 02:52, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the tummy shading? I feel dumb saying tummy... a cat  ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:39, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white legs as well. 03:59, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:07, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the hind leg is blotchy. Blur it. 17:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. CBA? 01:06, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You cant just CBA your own image like that. The haunch highlight needs to be bigger and brighter and the shading under the chin needs to be blurred badly. 02:16, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:36, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's all around a bit blotchy, could you blur it out? this is still lovely, regardless. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  10:07, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! I hope that's better. 22:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more consistent (if you're using layers - and I hope you are o.e - make sure the black is completely black all the way through :3) and blur it a bunch. <span style="">10:54 Fri Dec 30

Add some shading to the tail. As it is, it looks flat and really bright. Breeze whisker  16:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not using layers. :3 I did some more shading, and I seriously can't blur anything anymore. Everything's blurred as much as I can get it to be. 20:35, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should redo the grey on the tail, it's super blotchy. 22:16, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, all the shading is really blotchy. I think you should redo it. And I know I can't make you use layers, but I assure you, if you do, you'll never hear the "blotchy" comments again about your shading :P That is, if you use the layers properly XD <span style="">01:48 Wed Jan 4

Okay,''' redone. '''Look better now? -- 03:30, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great. CBA? 16:30, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 12:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! He should have more stripes. 12:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Icestorm has dibs on this image, did you get permission to do this image? 16:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even if you were allowed to, hmm. The eye needs more contrast in shades, and needs to be a tiny tad less neon Define the shading just a bit. 17:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm isn't active right now, so I don't know if she would be able to lay claim to any of her images. Try and thin out the middle of the stripes on the tail by a pixel or two. Also, the eyes look like they're blue with a tint of green. Did you color pick right from the warrior/deputy? 19:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even know Icestorm had dibs on the image... I actually just chose the color, since his eyes are an ice blue shade. 20:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon and add depth to them. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Move the stripes on his haunch closes to his head up further and make the top one longer. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon. 23:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes. 00:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Correct me if I am wrong,but could you defie the shading a tad bit. Otherwise, excellent job! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks really dark. Also could you define the shading on the whitish part of the tummy? a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink a bit and lighten the shading a bit. <span style="">00:54 Fri Dec 23 00:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

His image's stripes are being redone to look like Tigerstar's. Might as well do that here instead of the tweak page. ;) 03:43, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Be right back going to puke because of this >_>  19:20, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Awsome! Fix the stripes to look more like his warrior image. Moonstorm88 22:23, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

His warrior image needs to be redone Moon. Can you fix the angle of the stripes? I don't think it's natural for them to be diagonal like that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I made them look like Tigerstar's stripes, so that's why they look that way. 00:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are great, but they do need to be vertical. If you used layers, you can meddle around with it some and not have to redo them  04:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I posted his new warrior, so make the stripes match that, and don't forget the line along his back. 14:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took the colors from his new warrior image. 15:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, CBA? 20:57, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, yes, I'm interrupting. Smudge the chest more to match his warrior. 17:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, no, not like that. Use a smaller brush with the blur smudge tool and match his warrior. 18:05, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cha  18:19, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Did you look at the changed version? The changes aren't showing here. (Sorry that if looks like I removed your recent post on here, the wiki is being stupid.)  19:28, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Changes still aren't showing, and it's been a few hours. Try re-uploading again. 03:36, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Should be working now I hope. 11:03, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great ^^ Comments before approval? 17:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt: it's almost ready, but not quite. Smudge the white on the belly into the pelt some more so it looks like definitive fur-smudgies, darken the shading so it matches the other images, and add some depth to the eyes at the top and then I'll CBA this :3 <span style="">01:14 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded  14:26, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes should be a brighter blue. 04:38, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:59, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be darkened. <span style="">22:10 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded I fail so badly. When I went to darken the shading I realized I forgot to recheck the layer where I had the darkened shading. xD. Changes aren't showing. 22:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Haha it's cool I always forget to uncheck my "colour swatches" layer :P Define the smudgies on the belly some more. <span style="">22:46 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded  23:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on the belly. 14:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

The white on the belly is still too messy: I suggest redrawing that bit and re-smudging it. The shading needs to be darkened. <span style="">01:50 Wed Jan 4

Define and blur the shading. 21:52, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:01, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Loudbelly (A) - For Approval
Posting this for Brightstripes bause she can't edit the page yet. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 13:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading a tad. 18:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink to give it a bit more of a realistic look. 18:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" on the haunch and shoulder a bit bigger. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it;s making her look black almost. <span style="">17:26 Sat Dec 17

Are you still working on this? And Sweet, Loudbelly is a boy =p  16:44, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit. 18:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It has been 8 days since this has been worked on. Declined. Somebody may take this over if they don't have two apprentice projects  18:57, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could I take over? Birdpaw got declined, so i dont know :l. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:26, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

No need to ask, just reserve it before someone else  19:28, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking over. It'll be reuploaded today or tomorrow. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and shading. Highlights were hard, though, because I don't use them. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:58, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading please, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">02:53 Sun Dec 25

He has waste between the whiskers and smudged lineart on both of the ears. 21:31, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, not just the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:43, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? It's been five days. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it really? it always fails for me. I added transperency.... I hope >.<  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 21:30, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 22:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I actually quite like this. I lightened the shading and smudged and blurred the earpink which i hadn't done before. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 20:31, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 22:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'd suggest taking a look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement as right now I don't really understand where your light source is. <span style="">22:14 Sun Jan 1

The lineart is blurred/smudged. <span style="">01:15, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Define and blur the shading a lot, and I'm not sure, but I think there's waste around the lineart. 00:29, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (A) ~ For Approval


UGH this is such a fail DX Took all colors from his Warrior image, and highlights are coming from the back. *hangs head in shame* Fail fail fail fail fail! I tried to smudge...and got a major fail....Dont look at my shame DX! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black into the white a lot and add shading, because I can't see any. 16:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay. *bags head* I hate this image DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:35, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The black on his head needs to be touching the corner of his eyes like on his leader image. And lengthen the tail. 18:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

One thing, I can't make his tail longer, for stuff like that, I use Pixirl, and his tail touches the end of the box. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can do it for you if you email me the file with layers. Neneshell@gmail.com. 18:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't use files on this one, for fear i'd lose them like i did with Rubblepaw.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So how are you editing it? If you don't have the file, how can you make changes, besides redoing it each time you exit? 19:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, like no, i have the one file that's his image, but i didn't do layers like a layer for his color and earpink and shaidng and stuff, and just did that on the one thing. Like I opened up the blank, and took the black, drew on his patches, filled in the patches, and then darkened the white a bit, added shading and highlights, the blurred everything, and added his eyes color. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

And i did this one on Pixirl....not Gimp, 'cause Gimp is being spazzy for me atm. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

You have to save the image as an .xcf, I believe - if it's the same on Pixlr - for the layers to save. Doing everything on one layer is not a good idea. For example, what if someone asked you to lighten the patch, which I was going to? You can't just use the dodge tool, or it'd lighten the lineart as well. I can't tell you how to make your chararts, but I can advise you to use layers. 22:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, no matter what the tail does need to be lengthened to match his leader blank. 23:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/add shading. I really can not see it. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing...for reasons.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:00, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over, if thats okay. <span style="">06:03, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

Go ahead, DJ. Maple: next time you withdraw an image, remember to change the title. <span style="">10:01 Wed Dec 21

I did, I put 'withdrawn.' I'm sure i did.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:28, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

She did, DJ changed it I'm assuming. DJ, don't change the heading; only leads should do that. 21:23, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. <span style="">03:17, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

Lighten up the black a bit. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:20, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- 04:06, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I redid the whole image, and fixed all of the above. <span style="">23:18, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011
 * Also fail on the tail stretch. <span style="">23:23, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

There's waste around the charart. 00:24, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  <span style="">03:21, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Extend the image border up so his tail isn't cut off. 03:36, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but how do I do that? I'm kind of new around GIMP... I tried rotating the image but the lineart just got blurred. <span style="">23:20, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Go to 'Image' then to 'Canvas Size' at the top, then make it taller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:27, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did that, the canvas went bigger, but the border stayed where it was. I could just make the tail tip rounder so it looks like it's not cut off from the border. <span style="">00:46, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Would you like help? If you have an .xcf file then send me that in an email, otherwise I'll just work off the .png to help you out :3  02:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention. After you change the canvas size, you have to go to 'Layer' then hit 'Layer to Image Size' or something along those lines. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I tried that too Pale, but unfortunatly, it didn't work. :( Ivy, if you want to fix it, you can. I suggest you work off the png image, since the Gimp one (xcf) is really odd and doesn't look like the image I have here. I also made the tail tip rounder a bit, so Reuploaded I guess. <span style="">09:33, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Actually, don't worry. I've got it. <span style="">09:39, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Reuploaded -  <span style="">09:47, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

It looks like his tail is kinked near the middle, try to smooth it out like the regular chararts. 15:30, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I tried that "kink" to try to make it look like the normal blanks. <span style="">00:28, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Smooth out the tail. It's too thin in the middle and too thick at the top. 00:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white, and make the markings match the leader image more. The white on the forehead should go up higher, the white should cover the whole haunch, there shouldn't be any white on his shoulder, only on his forearm, and the white on his chest should go up quite as high. also redden the earpink a bit and make the eyes more amber than yellow. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I can help you with the lineart on the tail if you need it. It's really no that hard. Just select part of the tail, move it up higher, and add in the missing lineart in the middle of the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :/ I don't quite like the tail. <span style="">01:52, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Thicken the lineart on the tail and don't make it bulbous on the top  01:58, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I could probably do it for you, if you like. I know a perfect way to do it. 02:00, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Oblivion. Just do it off the png image though, since the xcf is bad. <span style="">00:02, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Re-uploaded. There you go :3 00:14, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Oblivion, this looks great. Comments? <span style="">00:44, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Define the shading and darken it, I can barely see it, and make the white on the face a bit.... cleaner. I don't know how to describe it, it just looks kinda messy right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:19, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Yuck! <span style="">00:23, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Lighten the black a bit and darken the shading slightly. It's not bad! I like it :3 <span style="">01:02 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded -  I don't think changes are showing. <span style="">00:18, Sun, Jan, 1, 2012

Add some more shading to the tail and darken the shading on the haunch. Clean up the white a bit more on the face, and make the face "highlight" bigger. <span style="">01:57 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded -  I don't know how good that went, but I want this approved before it gets to number 1. <span style="">04:23, Wed, Jan, 4, 2012

Blur where the white patches meet the black. 02:34, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) ~ For Approval
My least favorite charart :\ FerretclawLover 16:24, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Why, shes cute! Smudge her ear-pink into her ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Define the tail shading a tad. 18:16, December 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

REUPLOADED, the reason is that she just isn't up to what I call the Icewish Standard. She's average :\ FerretclawLover 18:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more on either side of where you've already smudged it 20:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, is this what you mean? I got a little confused so I just did what I think you're saying...FerretclawLover 20:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The face shading needs to be more defined. The shading chart in the tutorials shows shading on the face, and it is hard to see if it was added. Otherwise great job! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not actually sure whether I put face shading or not...FerretclawLover 17:57, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cheshire, the shading placement is artists choice, as long as it makes sense, than it's fine. ;) <span style="">23:44 Wed Dec 21

Blur the earpink. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  23:46, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like disagreeing but I think the earpink looks fine. :)  14:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think the earpink should be fixed, so it looks like it going into the ear, not into the pelt. (if that makes any sense at all) And blur the shading on her belly tons, looks darken than the rest of it. 17:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED  17:40, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 21:03, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for inturupting, but can you please lighten the back paw shading on the heel, and the belly shading? It's darker than the rest of the shading. <span style="">18:15 Tue Dec 27

I think the intensity of it is fine (don't lighten it) but I also think the shading could be defined on the chest, neck, and front foot. Also make sure the shading is the same darkness at the top of the hind leg farthest from us if not darker. <span style="">10:59 Fri Dec 30

It has now been a week and two days. Anyone that wants this can take over. If not, it's archived in 24 hours. 04:36, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 15:45, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did the shading instead, wait for changes. 15:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

OMG please don't decline this! I really want to continue doing this! If you decline it then it's my fault :| *kicks self*  18:34, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Icewish, but you didn't work on this promptly enough, so this image is now Moonleaf's. Could you lighten the base coat, Moon? <span style="">22:19 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded 04:46, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. <span style="">04:48 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded 18:36, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the shading over her head going to her tail. 00:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded You mean the waste? I noticed that, but waited until someone else pointed that out? 00:26, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 00:42, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (A) ~ CBA
She is beautiful, comments? 02:42, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nice

Tigerheart273 02:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur what? You need to be more specific, and whatever it is, I think it is fine, and if I did blur the whole thing it would be messy. 02:56, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

This is GORGOEUS! I'm mega jelly. Define the shading. 03:02, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I defined the shading slightly, too much would make it look odd, and thanks. 03:07, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is great, and this is such a beautiful cat, but I can't help but notice that some of the back leg farthest from us is not fully shaded, and if the light source is coming in which part of the back leg is in shadow, then all of it should be shaded, and unless she has paws in a darker color (I looked at her description and it was not mentioned) then the whole farthest back leg should be shaded. I do admire this though... Good job! a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:14, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart, I can't blur the whole tail. It'l mess up the tail, what the shading? The spots? I am going to ask you to read the guidelines of this project before commenting on an image. 03:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the nosepink a tad. ;) 04:35, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the paws a bit. The stripes on her head look like she's angry, haha. 18:40, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the paws a little because they are supposed to be golden-brown, I defined the nose-pink, but the I took the nose color from the leader image, and I am not going to change it again. I also added shading to the furthest back paw, and thanks!

Don't forget to sign! ^^ Of course, it's georgous. Define the head shading a tad. <span style="">00:51, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Brighten or add highlights to match the leader image. It's really shiny on that one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:45, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:12, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job. Darken the shading on the stomach so it matches the rest of the shading. <span style="">22:20 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded. @Wildheart, thanks. :3 00:40, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Nicely done. CBA? 16:31, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Boulderpaw (A) ~ For Approval
My first apprentice ^^. Tell me what you think. 17:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Smudge pelt into earpink. ,17:52,December 23,2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he be short-haired, since he's a WindClan cat? 18:14, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh really? He has to be a short-haired? 19:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, yes, since all WindClan cats get short-haired images, unless they were described as long-haired. 20:39, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I'll fix it. 00:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight/lighter part go along with the light source better. There's no possible light source that could make it go in the middle of the tail like that, straight through. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:25, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:42, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the whole thing kinda blurry? Like you resized it or something. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is a bit smaller than the blank. Fix it. 03:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink could be lighter and more blurred. 06:45, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same as the others it's 139x134. Or is that wrong? I agree it looks smaller but when I resized it to 139x134 just like all the others it was the same. Even in the file it shows that size. 18:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

You resized it? That's probably the problem. First off, that would be why this looks blurry, and second, the canvas size may not be the same as the other blanks from the start, so when you resized it, the canvas size matched, btu the blank didn't. You may have to redo. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:34, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I just make it bigger so it is easier to work with but then on others when I save it, it goes back to the normal size. I'll redo it if you want me to. 17:03, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Is it better? 17:54, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink. <span style="">18:28 Mon Dec 26

The lineart is still blurred. I can fix it for you if you want me to. <span style="">00:47, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Nah I got this DJ..@Sweet do you mean make the color duller or dull the earpink I have on there? 18:55, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 19:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around the image, darken and redden the earpink, darken the base coat, and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:40, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

He still looks blurry, and that image is definitely smaller than the blank. 03:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder, I think, you must redone it, Im sorry for first, I saved it into my computer and looked closer, the lineart is whole blurred, whole. Im sorry but it cant be approvet if you dont fix that. ,21:29,December 28,2011

Re-Uploaded I think it's finally right. 23:53, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

YUes, the lineart looks good. Smude the pelt into the earpink a bit more. <span style="">02:06, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

And make the earpink redder and darker, and either fill in, or darken the nose. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:33, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I know the earpink is horrible. xD 03:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the ear more so it looks like fur. <span style="">11:35 Fri Dec 30

Re-Uploaded 16:04, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 17:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 23:20, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Where's your light source? If it's from the back, make sure the stomach and chest are completely shaded, and enlarge the shading on the front of the haunch and shoulder. Blur all the shading as well. <span style="">22:23 Sun Jan 1

I looks to me almost as if he has a stripe on his hind leg. But that maybe be the shading. Breeze whisker  00:59, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="">02:05 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uploaded 00:05, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (A) - CBA
Weel, I tried match the stripes, what do you think?,17:48,December 23,2011 (UTC)

Very brave, seeing as I'd never be brave enough to try to take on this charart. Very nice stripes. Just add a little depth to the eyes. ^^ 18:27, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, Shelly! Reuploaded ,19:25,December 23,2011 (UTC)

There needs to be way less stripes. This patterens pretty, but it barely matches the warrior. 21:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading 21:31, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,21:53,December 23,2011 (UTC)

Theres still too many stripes. 02:24, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

And on his warrior image the stripes fade and pick back up again. And there're more spots. Breeze whisker  03:21, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Merry Christmas :-) ,09:28,December 24,2011 (UTC)

Make less stripes on the tail. 21:44, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:26, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,14:51,December 25,2011 (UTC)

Thicken and redden the stripes a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,11:30,December 28,2011 (UTC)

Looks good, CBA? :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:32, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but the stripes need to be bigger and blurred more 16:03, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

If I make bigger stripes they will cross each other and the whole image looks ruined, Im sorry, I try make something but im not sure ,16:44,December 29,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,14:11,December 30,2011 (UTC)

This is lovely. I see nothing wrong with this. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  20:54, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit and make them fade out like they do on the warrior image. If you're having issues with that, use the airbrush and click the "fade out" option. <span style="">22:25 Sun Jan 1

ahh it isnt looking like faded o_O Reuploaded ,18:57,January 2,2012 (UTC)

It looks just fine, Leafy. CBA? 16:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt.L) - For Approval
This is for when she was described as gray in the allegiances of TFW. I got ears and eyes off of her alternate deputy. She was described as just gray. Not light or dark, so I didn't colour pick off one of her alts for her pelt color. Comments? <span style="">16:56 Sun Dec 25

Lovely! Ligthen her up a bit, she looks almost black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:03, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar is shorthaired. Very nice, Sweet. 17:04, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't all RiverClan cats long-haired? <span style="">17:17 Sun Dec 25

All her other images are shorthaired, and, she may have gotten the shorthaired gene from her ThunderClan parent. o3o 17:23, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm a derp face. Never mind me. :P <span style="">17:36 Sun Dec 25

Make the nose darker and either smudge/blur the earpink more. 19:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, also she's shorthaired because she was described as sleek. 20:27, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">01:56 Mon Dec 26

Lighten her, she looks dark gray. Make her nose pink, since she was described with one, and blur the earpink and make it less purple. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:22, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">15:36 Mon Dec 26

Re-uploaded. Dulled the ear-pink and nose. <span style="">18:33 Mon Dec 26

Can you make the eye color match the regular leader version? 23:51, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">17:03 Wed Dec 28

Add/define the depth in her eyes, and redden and darken the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The eyes won't look like her leader eyes, because I had to make the depth more "visible". <span style="">18:48 Thu Dec 29

The earpink's way too hot pink right now, dull it a ton, darken it, and redden it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:17, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. (I colour picked the earpink off the chart, and reddened it. <span style="">17:33 Fri Dec 30

Make her nose gray. 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

She was described with a pink nose. <span style="">17:51 Fri Dec 30

I think it's me but I see some waste above the ears. If not then smudge the pelt into the ears some more and blur the shading. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:57, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:18 Sat Dec 31

Give her a gray nose, make her ear-pink a bit paler, and define the shading on the tail. 21:14, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded She has a pink nose, it's in her description. <span style="">02:24 Mon Jan 2

Make the nose less bright, and also the ear pink in <-- this ear is only halfway filled. If you get what I mean. Fill the whole ear with the earpink. 14:31, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The ear is like that because her fur could be infront of it.<span style="">22:23 Mon Jan 2

Make sure all the shading is the same darkness. <span style="">02:07 Tue Jan 3

Lionblaze (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
Okay, before anyone bickers, he was described as Orange as an apprentice. Any way, comments for improvement? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  17:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match the warrior charart and dull the ear pink and smudge it into the ear. Blur the stripes and make them piontier. 17:35, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sand, it doesn't need to match the warrior charart. If anything, make it look more orange, and less golden. Beautiful. 17:37, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  17:48, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The paws look yellow.. 20:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  20:21, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image seems to bright/yellow. Desaturate the image a tad and make it have a slightly more orange hue. Also, sumdge the pelt into the earpink a tad more. 20:25, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  00:51, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make it more orange, blur/smudge the stripes, and lower the highlights or darken the shading. 00:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love the smudge tool. Any way, comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  01:36, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, Rainy! Blur the ear-pink abit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks Maple. So happy for the smudge tool to be there. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  01:55, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

---> This eye (at the top) looks pink-ish tinted. It might be my conputer, but could you make them more orange. <span style="">03:25 Mon Dec 26

It's the same as the warrior image. I'll change it if someone agrees to it. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  04:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree with Sweet on this. 07:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your screens. It's not pink. It's amber. 19:04, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Agreeing with Twi here, its fine. Can you make the tear in his ear go a bit deeper? I know its supposed to look the warrior image, but right now it looks odd. 21:24, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Like the pixil closest to the white pupil thing it pink tinted, it really looks like it's pinky/orange. <span style="">21:31 Mon Dec 26

I opened it up on Pixlr and zoomed in, its fine in my opinion. 22:19, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 03:44, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think I did this one when I just joined PCA, and it got declined. Shouldn't this be declined as well? 17:20, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't have an image with the old blanks. Do you have a quote from when he was described? 19:12, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well, maybe after it was declined, they deleted the file, then Rainy posted it back up. 20:17, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

But wouldn't it have a delete log on it? 20:19, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well the same thing happened with a lot of alts, including Bluestar's. Sometimes as the members change, our opinions change I guess. If pale ginger (sandstorm) is different from orange, golden is too, so I think this should stay. Make him a bit brighter. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:27, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ya, a friend told me to say that if someone tried to get it declined. 04:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink slightly and make the torn ear follow the line of the back of the ear more, if that makes any sense. Just make sure the left side of the torn ear doesn't flip back unnaturally. <span style="">22:36 Sun Jan 1

Re-uploaded. Comments? 22:57, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the lineart on the back of the torn ear longer? Now it kinda looks like the top of his ear was chopped off XD <span style="">02:09 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:28, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Egg (A) ~ For Approval
At long last, space! I know it looks weird, but any comments? 23:20, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:21, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little less neon. 23:47, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There is miscolored lineart on the paws and on his head/whiskers. 01:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:17, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

He's way too yellow right now. Make him more cream. 04:22, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:59, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

This still looks yellow. Darken the shading after you have fixed the color, although it might just be my bad eyes.. <span style="">05:12, Wed, Dec, 28, 2011

Reuploaded. Pixlr keeps crashing on me... 05:45, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more to blend in more to the higlights/unshaded parts. And add depth to the eyes. 16:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ear pink meets the pelt. It looks to rough. 18:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

That colour hrts my eyes. o.e Can you color pick off his loner image? <span style="">20:09 Wed Dec 28

Reuploaded. Mistypebble, there already is depth in the eyes, but I defined it just in case. ;3 23:47, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Omigawd, I'm a Derp, forgot to blur the shading. Eh, reuploaded. 23:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I meant add shading around it to not look flat.. But never mind, it looks fine. 01:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Should I reupload it for that? 14:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, its fine. ^-^  06:03, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur near the back leg..it looks blotchy. 17:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot. <span style="">22:41 Sun Jan 1

Withdrawing. Sorry, Pixlr spazzes out trying to work with the image. I can't cope with it randomly freezing and such, because then my blurs just don't work. 07:19, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. (took out one of my reservations)  17:00, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took all the colors from his loner image.. But something just doesn't look right to me.. >.<  18:53, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah idk looks like it needs to be lightened: both the shading and the pelt colour. <span style="">02:15 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded There, I think I fixed it. 21:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more, make sure the belly is completely shaded, and smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. <span style="">02:12 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded How does it look? 02:23, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) ~ For Approval
Ugh, this is horrible. Comments? 23:43, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink fill the entire ear and make it more visible 23:45, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, but, the white in the eye goes where there is one less black...If that made any sense. 23:49, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the shading, on the tail especially. This is nice! 23:53, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the dapples a lot. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:44, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  20:57, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, it'll be re uploaded shortly. 15:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Sorry Twilight, but I didn't get what you meant. Mind telling me again? 15:27, January 2, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Ya' know where on the blanks, the pupils in the eyes are two pixels wide until the top, where the right pixel is white? You didn't fill that in to black when you added the eye highlight on the other side. Just edit the lines so that those spots are black. Breeze whisker  15:57, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed eye. 21:29, January 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

The dapples should be dark grey, not black. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:01, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smokepaw (A) ~ For Approval
A space?! Do my eyes decieve me?? :O 00:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading 00:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. 20:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Defien the tail shading, and add some shading to the belly. <span style="">00:12, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Reuploaded The belly already had shading, so I just defined it along with the tail shading. 02:34, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading and smudge the earpink into the ear more. <span style="">00:50 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded Darkened/defined the shading.. I can never seem to get the earpink right... But I smudged/blurred it too. 19:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the stomach so it matches the rest of the shading. <span style="">22:44 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded Darkened the stomach shading. 02:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stomach shading more consistent or add a little patch of "highlights", whichever you prefer. <span style="">02:14 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded I kind of redid it, since I didn't like the old version of mine. xP  01:31, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (A) ~ For Approval
First charart, yay. Sorry if someone already did him or wanted to do him- if so, I didn't see, I apologize, and disregard this. Crits or comments? 02:11, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

You have to reserve this. Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Very nice. 02:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

How does one reserve something? 02:19, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Here. That should help. And rename this Birchfall.apprentice.png and make it match his warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:33, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know. I rather like this pattern, and the warrior image does not look very realistic to start with and has a bunch of random, miscolored pixels in it. Prehaps the warrior image should be redone to resemble this? 04:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. When his warrior image was up for tweaking, I kept trying to say something about the highlights, but it got approved before I could. I'll add him to the list now. 04:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, sounds good to me, I never liked his warrior image personally... XD Anyways, define the stripes on the body. Make them look more like stripes than flecks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and smudge his pelt into the earpink. Breeze whisker  16:06, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Birchfall.apprentice.png 20:18, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, didn't see Paleclaw's message so nevermind me.. 03:23, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken darken the nosepink a little? This is lovely. 21:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink as well. 00:48, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Redone but not reuploaded- it says something about a MIME type, and I'm not sure how to fix it, so I might just upload a new image. 00:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you have to reupload a new fil. You can't upload a png over a gif file. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:15, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 22:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's a lump of waste where his back rises. 23:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit. <span style="">00:48 Sat Dec 31

Make this transparent :3 22:20, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? You have until tonight to re-upload it before it is declined. 16:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (A) ~ For Approval
An opening! Did this in like... 10mins. Yes, very sloppy. I know I did say I'd never do a wavy tabby again (is this one?) but, this was the first thing I saw. Tell me if the uploading doesn't work. It comes up with Tallstar Apprentice, for soem reason. I know there is waste. <span style="">05:55, Wed, Dec, 28, 2011

Very nice! Thin out the stripes on the haunch a tiny bit. 07:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. This is wonderful! 16:01, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thank you. The lightening of the highlights didn't do much -_- <span style="">02:38, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

There's a halo of waste around the image  16:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Changes are not showing yet -  Dang you waste. <span style="">00:22, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Maybe it's just me, but it looks like there should be another stripes on the haunch (if you're matching the warrior image) <span style="">22:49 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded -  Yep, you're right. I added them. <span style="">01:47, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Smudge the earpink a bit into the ear. Lovely job :3 <span style="">02:18 Tue Jan 3

Lighten the face and chest shading just a tad. 02:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I didn't lighten the shading too much, otherwise it wouldn't match, so I lightened the belly shading too. <span style="">04:04, Wed, Jan, 4, 2012

Stonefur(A)~For Apprvoal
Here he is! Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Take out the shredded ears. We typically assume that the injuries occur in the warrior rank unless the cat is mentioned with them as a kit or apprentice. 16:02, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Do i remove the scars aswell or not? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I imagine when his ears got shredded those scars came along with it as well. Give him a gray nose unless he's like his sister and has a pink one 16:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

* shakes head* he has a pink nose. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:18, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:39, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the earpink and darken it a bit, smooth out the shading on the haunch, it's a bit blotchy, and make the highlight/lighter part of the tail go all to way down, not just at the tip. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay....sorry i was busy....I'll get to it in a second.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink. And it looks like he has a lighter muzzle. 12:19, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (A) - For Approval
Meh. It's not great. 16:50, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading and smudge and blurr the pelt into the ear pink. 17:16, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her eyes. They don't really match her other images. ✧Twi✧   Happy New Year~!  01:15 Fri Dec 30

She looks like a pale grey. Lighten up the lighter parts a bit. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 23:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the front paw farthest from us just a tad. 20:00, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Er...It's been a while without a reupload... 16:16, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Beetlenose (A) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Comments? 16:52, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him up, then add shading. The lineart is very hard to see. 17:28, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is my computer or does he look like a really dark brown but not black. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your computer and '''re-uploaded. ''' 20:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading. Darken or define it. <span style="">00:31, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Re-Uplaoded. 22:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour a lot and add some depth to the eyes. <span style="">22:54 Sun Jan 1

Blur the earpink a lot. 03:18, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour more and blur the shading. Smudge the earpink into the ear with a smaller brush so it looks like fur. <span style="">02:23 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. 21:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">02:15 Wed Jan 4

Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot. 23:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (A) ~ For approval


Weee.....nother solid apprentice.....Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:39, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty~ Can you blur the haunch shading? 22:41, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yup. Reulpaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:48, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add shading to the chest? 23:08, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, the sunlight would hit her chest. Define the shading, especially on the back of her front leg closest to us, and her haunch has some blurred lineart 23:24, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Same with the base of her tail. Blur all the shading a lot. 01:09, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Where's your light source? It looks like the light is coming from underneath her in the front, and that wouldn't really be natural... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix that tommorrow, we're in Kansas, and leaveing to go home today. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:12, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 03:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? <span style="">02:16 Wed Jan 4

Mosspelt (A) ~ For Approval
Since it's been two weeks and Dapple didn't upload it, I decided to do this. Comments? 00:01, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white some more. <span style="">00:49, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Darken the black, and I'm not sure if there already is or not, but make sure you have both ginger and tan on her. That's what she has in her queen image, even if it's not that noticeable. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:09, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

She's kinda flat. Define and/or darken the shading. Breeze whisker  04:02, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't darken the black because I got the color from her queen. 14:20, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

She still feels flat. Blur, blur, blur. -- 01:25, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Her patches need to look, furry, like the queen, and smudge them into the grey/black more. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 01:59, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Heheh, I couldn't put it on cause the spaces were all filled every time I went on. Oh well, I don't mind. You should define the shading. 03:12, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:43, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Her patches should be more ginger. 04:08, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:09, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Patches don't look like Mosspelt's. Fix that please :)  12:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm waiting for a second opinion on that, since I made sure all the patches matched. 12:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderheart (A) ~ For Approval
This was a challenge... I like it. 8D 00:52, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

She's so pretty! <3 Smudge the pelt into the ear pink. I luff this. 00:56, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

So purdy. *.* There's some waste by the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:08, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hehe. Thanks. =3 02:40, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a tad. Breeze whisker  04:01, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:32, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

B'aww, she's so cute! Define the shading on the head ;3 08:46, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :3 23:07, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a tad. Nice job :3 <span style="">23:18 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded. Thanks. :3 23:58, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit sharper? <span style="">02:29 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded. 02:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Her nosey looks a lil pinkish. So adorable!! 12:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
I wasn't sure what color the nose should be, and I know I have to lighten the shading. Comments? 17:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:00, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

He needs to be long furred 17:59, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's why he looked so messed up. 19:00, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

The nose has to be black, if you were wondering. ♫Purplemoon♪  Stay up until Midnight  22:49, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

No one has commented on this in two days. 16:27, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Patience, Wildfire. Smudge the earpink into the ear some more, make the white shiny in the eye smaller, and darken the shading on the top of the farthest hind leg. Lovely job. <span style="">00:44 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded I'm going to get rid of the waste later I have to do HW 01:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Reuploaded -- 22:37, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Foxleap (A) ~ For Approval
Tabbies aren't my strong point but I tried. :D 01:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. This looks great! 01:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I love the stripes! ♫Purplemoon♪  Stay up until Midnight  01:48, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:59, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and define the "highlights". I luff dis! 02:11, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay not everybody used highlights, and thats pretty much making them brighter. The nose is supposed to be gray. Define the stripes. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:49, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is not supposed to be gray. It's only supposed to be gray on gray cats, and black on black cats. Lighten the whole image, define the shading, blue the stripes, and try and make them match the warrior a bit better. Maybe add more? I'm not sure, I just know it doesn't really match right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:28, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose isn't gray... nevermind you were talking to sandstorm, I took the colors from his old apprentice and warrior images, I'll fix the shading and 'highlights' 15:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:32, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

This also hasn't been commented on in two days. 16:29, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Again, patience. Make the white shinies smaller, define the stripes, lighten the base colour, and smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">02:30 Tue Jan 3

Can you make his stripes to look more like the ones on his warrior image? 21:08, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took all colors from his warrior, I lightend the image but just saying, also what do you want me to do to fix the stripes? -- 01:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know what it is, but the image doesn't really seem to match, at least stripes-wise. I'd say add highlights, personally, 'cause it seems like there are highlights on the other image. <span style="">02:24 Wed Jan 4

Scorchfur (A) ~ For Approval
I think this is the last spot! This is my first as an apprentice, from 02:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! There's some waste by the ear on ---> that side and on that side of the tail. This is great Mooneh! Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:47, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks! 02:56, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's specks of waste around the charart, and part of the earpink closest to us leaked onto the back of the ear, could you erase that? 03:07, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Just tell me if you see any more waste, I tried to get it all. 03:23, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 03:24, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Smudged, got rid of the waste. 03:43, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the... I don't know if that's a highlight or part of the normal fur, "spot" on the haunch a tad. 14:34, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's a chunk of waste below the hind paw closest to us, and flecks of waste around his paws. 17:13, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''So much waste! XD 19:03, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the hindleg. <span style="">19:54 Sat Dec 31

Re-uploaded. I blurred. =3 22:15, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Is the haunch highlighted? If so lighten it. 16:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Light enough? 20:27, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the face a bit. Looks nice :3. I dont know if its my computer, but there is a little waste on the sides of the tail.--User: Fallenstars 23:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The highlight on the haunch seems to be too big. Make it kind of rounder and smaller. 03:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I really made it worse, but see to it. =3 21:42, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

There is still some waste around the tail. 21:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If there's any more waste, I'm a mouse. =3 22:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a mouse ;) there's some above his tail. Smudge the earpink into the ear some more. <span style="">02:33 Tue Jan 3

There is also some more waste near the base of his tail. 21:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *squeaks like a mouse* I know there's more waste...go ahead, point it out. XD 22:04, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on both of his hind paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  01:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

And around his head. 04:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy =3 21:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The part at the base of the tail looks kind of like a highlight, darken that part. 01:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Leafpool (MCA) ~ For Approval
Heh... I like drawing her stripes. Comments? :3 20:51, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose pink is barely visible. Can you define it? 23:31, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little. Wow, you did great with the stripes! ♫Purplemoon♪  Stay up until Midnight  23:52, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

You did a much better job than me! Blur all the shading, and lighten the shading in the middle of the body. 12:13, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't notice it was you doing this. X3 Define the tail shading. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:47, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh he he. :3 00:02, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it blends in with the fur too much. 23:20, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Rushtail (A) ~ For Approval
Weird shading again :S Comments? 21:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, dull the highlights. 21:49, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  22:27, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! DUll the highlights a tiny bit more. 12:09, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you :D 17:05, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">20:15 Sun Jan 1

Define the ear pink a little more. 03:01, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:26, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base fur. On the warrior image, it looks a little lighter.

Re-uploaded 16:53, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, but Define the front earpink, I can't really see it at all... 23:23, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:10, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MCA) ~ For approval
First charart, comments? 22:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Forgot to make transparent, made it transparent. 22:44, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! but you have to do these things. 1. Take the colors from the MC, that includes the ear pink and eye color. 2. Smudge the ear pink into the ear more and blur it. 3. I can barely see the nose pink, if there is any. 4. make the pattern match the MC, because it has to match. Wow that's a lot of stuff xD  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  22:48, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Add colour to the nose, it's white. <span style="">22:56 Sat Dec 31

Re-uploaded I tried to match the MC the best I could. Took all colors from her MC image. 23:18, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Her face looks gray. Lighten the shading if its that. -- Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan!  23:23, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

I see youre trying to match. Her color is lovely, Leafy :-) Just try to sharpen stripes and make them more zig-zag looking, just play with it and dont be scary, you taken a really brave choice.. ,24:25,December 31,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried... <:3 00:51, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes need to be sharper and zigzagy still. Don't blur the stipes that much. Also redden/darken the earpink, so it's a hot pink color. Other then that, this is great for a first charart. <span style="">01:57, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Re-uploaded I think I made it worse D: 03:51, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, It looks like you havent changed anything. And dont waste it, spend on that cat more time. Dont be such *mouse-brained* xD Why you dont try match the stripes more? Its not worse, only wasted. Try make more stripes too. ,19:21,January 2,2012 (UTC)

Well said, Leafstorm. If it helps, I'm pretty sure that Icestorm used the "Ripple" tool which in GIMP is under "Filters". 02:51, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I don't think I'm ready for Mothwing yet. So I'm withdrawing this. 21:08, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, then I'll take over. 01:23, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (Alt. Lo) - For Approval
I reserved this before the decision was made to redo the loner blanks, so I'm allowed to post this. I messed up the filename, it's supposed to be Snake (BC).loner.alt, could an admin move this to the correct name? Otherwise it just kinda wastes space. 06:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ass ADD (XD) shading to the collar and the back ear. And I THINK this is supposed to be shorthaired, but correct me if I'm wrong. :P Good job luff. ^^


 * laughs butt off* ^^Best typo EVER. Anywhoo, blur the earpink and make it smaller - 18:38, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Poor person who made that typo, define the back leg shading. <span style="">01:19 Tue Jan 3

It was Paleh xD I've added the unsigned thingy so people will know. Nothing about the image for me, just do what everyone else said ^^ 01:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh goodness, I fail.... XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:56, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded XD poor Paleh! And no because his rogue alt is longhaired  19:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the border and there's this weird darker grey thing on his right front leg. 04:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:02, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) (A) ~ For Approval
I love this :3 Second charart, comments? Solids are easy! :3 16:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Lighten the back paws shading. (And only remove the color chart if you don't need it) 16:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Stupid me x3 Forgot to remove the color spots. 16:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Again. Cropped image. 17:24, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot and darken the base color ,19:24,January 2,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:11, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and where the pelt meets the earpink. 21:14, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dang! I wanted to do this :\ Lighten the shading a lot. And the nose shouldn't be gray. 12:12, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Voletooth (A) ~ For Approval
Took the colors from the other images. (I did the elder) Comments? 18:30, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. Very pretty! <3 <span style="">02:37 Tue Jan 3

Owlclaw (A) - For Approval
Haha space :-) ,19:17,January 2,2012 (UTC)

There are less stripes on the warrior image, can you erase some? 19:20, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yea, Reuploaded ,19:32,January 2,2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot to fill in the nose. o3o <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 00:53, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

No..its filled ,19:03,January 3,2012 (UTC)

In that case, define it o3o. 22:24, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Match the stripes with his new warrior. 12:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (A) - For Approval


Never thumb an image. Also, you have to re-upload this over Cedarheart's apprentice image. Also, make the ear-pink fill the ear completely. Add depth to the eyes, blur teh shading and highlights a lot. 21:30, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is it? This might be a stupid question, cause I'm not a computer wizard, but what does "thumb" mean? *dies of embarassment*

It means it has the frame around it, or something and says who it was added by. Blur highlights (if there are any) and blur ear-pink, a lot, and define shading. Also, don't forget to sign with ~ 22:49, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, but can someone help me delete the thumbed one? I can't seem to find a way to do it..... sorry. 23:04, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, blur it plenty more, the ear-pink still needs to fill the ear completely, define the shading. 23:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should Add depth to the eyes... 02:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink, its too hot pinkish. Rainface, Leafy already said to define the shading. :P 21:13, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I just need I reminder on define-ing shading on gimp 2.6, and then I'm covered. Also, I don't want to be rude, but Rainface on your second comment what do you want me to blur? the shading or the earpink? help? 21:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste where haunches are and it seems flat. Plus it seems like you smudged where you need to blur. Shading could be gaussian blurred. 08:05, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you added shading so you need to add some. Darken the nosepink. Blur the highlights a ton, though that was already mentioned, I think. And Twi, adding depth to the eyes is the artist's choice. 12:10, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowtail (A) - For Approval
All colors from her warrior. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:26, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Lovely job :3 <span style="">01:07 Wed Jan 4

Mintfur (SC)~ For Approval
I'm redoing her images, so this should be a fine pattern. Comments? 05:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful <3. Lighten the shading just a little 12:27, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 01:13, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Littlecloud (A) ~ For Approval
All colors are from his medicine cat. Comments? 08:35, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more, on the sides of the earpink. <span style="">17:45 Tue Jan 3

Define the stripes and color his nose brown. 20:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mallownose (A) - For Approval
This is kinda weird... idk kinda... ugly? Comments? <span style="">01:03 Wed Jan 4

It's not ugly! Make this---> earpink more visible. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  01:49, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Purple :P <span style="">02:12 Wed Jan 4

Blur just a tad more. -- 11:17, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

...blur what? <span style="">01:37 Thu Jan 5

Sootfur (A) - For Approval
Yeah...my terrible pixlr skills right here. :S 02:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Terrible? Who's terrible? Certainly not you. Add some shading to the top of the head or move the "highlight" on the haunch up to clarify your light source, and make sure the belly is completely shaded :3 <span style="">02:11 Wed Jan 4

I'm terrible. Tone down the highlights a bit. 03:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image. 03:20, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I luv this :D Who says pixlr stinks? I use it! Blur the earpink a tad. 22:17, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oooh so pretty! Lighten the shading. :)  12:07, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Russetfur (A) - For Approval
I put this up hesitantly. I'm not entirely sure if she'd get an apprentice charart but her mentor was named and she's listed as her apprentice so I think this is appropriate. And yes, I know the ear-pink doesn't match, but this way, it's more visible. Comments? Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:19, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

If Hailstar gets one then so does she. It's so pretty! Smudge the pelt into the ear pink. 02:21, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:25, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A) - For Approval
Here she is, Tawnyfur! I know it's a fail. I haven't done a real charart since 2010. So therefore, you shall reteach me (yes, I looked at the tutorials)! So.....Bring On The Critism! Oh yeah...I may re-do the shading if I have to......again, sorry, it fails. 07:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Figured out how to fix shading and other stuff. -- 08:43, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I love fixing stuff in the course of a few hours. Oh, and for those who don't recognize the name..... look in the first arc, somewhere between books 3-6 -- 10:04, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. This time I gaussian blurred it. But I left waste *dies* I'll try to remove it... hopefully. -- 10:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you =3 20:56, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred. 21:03, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around the image. 21:11, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading and according to my wand tool, I removed all the waste. Does the ear look weird? 22:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear looks good, but the pelt needs to be smudged into the earpink. Also, there looks like there i slighter fur next to the ear. 22:21, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There you go. -- 23:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 00:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brambleberry (MCA) - For Approval
If Russetfur gets one, so does she. She's been given all the same information. Comments? Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  03:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, define the light parts on her shoulder and top of her haunch, as well as her tail, define the herb shading, define the white shine in her eye, and try making the spots blacker. 03:45, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivy Gee... Was there anything alright with the old version xP Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  03:52, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Of course ^^; 03:56, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

She didn't say anything anything about the earpink. xD Can you make the shading on the back leg farthest from us a little less flat? 04:02, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  04:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose, it looks socially awkward :P and this is BEAUTIFUL! 12:06, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brambleberry is described with a bright pink nose and I got it right from her MC charart. I'm not changing it. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  14:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart (A) ~ For Approval
I was kind of waiting for Sky to reserve this, but she never did, so I just went for it. x3 It feels good to be going back to Skyheart, her warrior version was my first charart. I feel so nostalgic. Anyways, I tried doing the stripes the way I made them on her warrior, so they should match decently. Colors are taken from warrior. Comments? 04:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Dude, you shoulda just asked me, I would have happily given it away, since I hate mine. ^^ Smudge the fur into the earpink a wee bit more, and blur the shading, and maybe lighten it up some. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 04:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sky didn't reserve it because I asked to do it xD. This is so much better than what I would have come up with. Lighten the shading at the feet in the back. 12:14, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (A) ~ For Approval
The warrior image needs to be tweaked. I'll try to do that as soon as I finish Mousefur's images. Comments? 04:06, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 04:09, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be much lighter :P she's supposed to be "pale light brown". <span style="">04:33 Thu Jan 5

Re-uploaded Psssshh I knew that XD *headdesk* 05:01, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Haha of course you did :P lighten it a bit more. <span style="">05:14 Thu Jan 5

Re-uploaded XP 05:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I think the nose should be pink...It is on her kit image. ;3 16:25, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (A) ~ For Approval
Oh yes, I got the pretty Icecloud. I actually asked some users for feedback so that I could fix it before I put it for approval. I'm really proud of this :)  12:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (A) ~ For Approval
I decided to do a new style because his entire image was bothering me for some reason. I honestly think it should be redone, sorry for whoever made it. If you want me to follow the old style I will but I like this style much better, though. 12:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If this is the style that's going to be kept, can you define the stripes? I can barely see them... 16:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) - For Approval
Yay for missing school~ It means I get to work on chararts. =P Anyway, by the looks of it, this hasn't been approved yet, or reserved, so, comments? *Shading Fail* Yes I see the waste. I'll fix that, along with the shading. =3 16:54, January 5, 2012 (UTC)