Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Sparrowpelt (A) - Redone
OA was scarlet, me, and Nightshine. Redone for reasons and all colors are from cloudy's file. Comments? 05:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more? nice! 20:27 Thu Nov 26

Re-uploaded: Thanks! 20:45, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading

Re-uploaded: I know there's waste. 04:09, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Where's your light source?

the top of his body 06:43, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 11:01, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded: 19:14, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Are any legs in light If so define it. Also, the leg furthest away from us, on --> side of the body, I cannot see any shading. Can you fix that? 20:58, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Tigerstar (App) ~ Redone
19:29, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

For reference, the base is #372111, the stripes are #1e120b, and the pale chest is #ac8a75. But this looks very nice!

Re-ups Thx for the ref c: 15:24, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the texture 19:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading some more. 19:15, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:30, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge/blur the pale parts a little more? It looks hard-edged. 04:48, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Mothflight (star) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be graying. OA is Kelpsy. 16:30, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

It shouldn't just be the muzzle unless it specifically says so, and it doesn't. It should be the entire pelt.

re-up man this day is getting worse and worse. 01:28, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up stupid waste. 01:29, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please put emphasis on the fact that she is greying. 04:35, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

now she looks like she's pale grey when she isn't. 05:39, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 05:52, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Make the muzzle gray like on the MC.

No only the muzzle should not be gray. Maybe put gray dashes through her pelt like Mumblefoot? 13:17, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

If the entire pelt should be graying, then the mc should probably be tweaked again, since as far as I can tell only the muzzle is graying on it. 18:59, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to have a bushy tail OA's were Sweetflower and FerretclawLover. I didnt touch anything but the tail. 02:01, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, I don't think it's enough. It's also long and thick too. Try to thicken the tail and make it a little longer. 05:37, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

no, it should only really be bushier. that's all it was nominated for, and she isn't known for a long tail. 05:38, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Try using something like Squirrelflight's tail. I think that's pretty bushy enough.

re-up  I just saw your comment, skye, I'll try to do something like that lol 00:34, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) ~ Tweaked
OA's were Nightshine, Ive, and Breeze. She was tweaked to have a bushy tail. 21:40, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

This looks more ragged than bushy, imo. As I said on the alt, I think the tail should be more like Squirrelflight, or even Feathertail.