User:Mousetalon

Mousetalon is a pale beige tortoiseshell and white she-cat with blue-gray eyes and short, slick fur.

About Me Before All the Long Stuff . ..
I am a teenager with brown hair. There, I said it.

Merry Christmas!!! Here is a Charcat I made to celebrate the season!!!!!



History
Mousetalon was born to Leafshade, a FogClan queen, along with Littlekit, Redkit, Purekit, Oatkit, and Magickit. Her father, believed to be a GlowClan warrior, is unknown. When she was 4 moons old, she and her best friend, Mothkit, sneaked out of the nursery along with Redkit to explore the territory. They were caught, however, by two new warriors on their silent vigil- Echonose and Kinklegs. Kinklegs scolded the two kits for sneaking out, but Echonose seemed interested by Mousekit's bravery. When she told Badgertooth, he laughed. As punishment, the two had to take care of the elders.

2 moons later, when it was time for Mousekit to become an apprentice, FogClan's leader, Violetstar, gave Mousekit to Echonose to mentor. Mousepaw was delighted, she had grown very close to Echonose. Redpaw, Littlepaw, Magicpaw, Oatpaw, and

Purepaw also got mentors.

Mousepaw saved Fogkit from an eagle, tearing off its talon, thus earning her warrior name Mousetalon.

Soon after Mousetalon became a warrior, Echonose became deputy after Ferntail, the former deputy, was killed in a battle against AdderClan. Mousetalon is shown to be very proud of her mentor, stating that she will be legendary among the Clans. Mousetalon and Mothfur start sharing tongues more often, and Vineflower laughs at her. Goldenrain dies, and Jewelfangs, the medicine cat herself, catches whitecough. Her apprentice, Foxpaw, takes up most of her duties. Unfortunately, Jewelfangs dies and Foxpaw gains her medicine cat name Foxtrot.

6 Moons later, Violetstar gives up her last life when greencough claims her. Foxtrot, the newly appointed medicine cat, is very distraught, but Mousetalon comforts her. Echonose goes to Moonstone with Foxtrot to get her nine lives.





After Echonose, now Echostar, receives her nine lives, Mousetalon is appointed deputy, much to her surprise. Soon after, Mothfur, her friend of many moons, tells her he loves her. They become mates soon after, and Mousetalon's apprentice, Fogpaw, becomes Fogwhisker. Mothfur tells Mousetalon that she was a wonderful mentor. Mousetalon blushes, and hurries away, much to Oakclaw's amusement. Littlestorm and Pureheart later tease her about Mothfur.

Soon, Mousetalon has her kits- Purplekit, Songkit, Lionkit, and Blazekit. She also recieves her second apprentice, a yound silver and black tabby she-cat named Silentpaw. Mousetalon quickly observes that Silentpaw is very cunning and sneaky. She is an excellent hunter, better than many warriors, and is well liked by the other apprentices. Songkit and Blazekit get into trouble when they trip Underfoot, a disagreeable senior warrior. Silentpaw also proves her fighting skills by defeating a AdderClan patrol while on patrol with Magiceyes.

On the day of the full moon, Silentpaw, Dirtpaw, and Shinepaw are made warriors by Echostar. Dirtclaw, Silentpaw's crush, gets the name Dirtclaw, Shinepaw becomes Shinetail, and Silentpaw receives the name Silentstep. Mousetalon is very proud of Silentstep, and Dirtclaw starts to flirt with her, amusing Mousetalon.

At the gathering, Spanglestar, the leader of AdderClan, asks Echostar to give some hunting ground to her clan, and Echostar refuses.

Mousetalon's kits soon become apprentices. (Look below for apprentice chart)

A few days later, on a patrol with Fogwhisker, Songpaw, Jaggedfoot, and Silentstep, Mousetalon encounters a fierce dog, but the patrol quickly defeats it. Fogwhisker then hears a yowl, and the patrol rushes back to camp. Sweetfur is having her kits. Since Foxtrot was at the Moonstone, Purplepaw must deliver the kits herself. She does so successfully, and Mousetalon is extremely proud.

When Kinklegs heals, Echostar resumes her normal duties, giving Mousetalon a new apprentice- Amethystpaw. Leafshade retires as an elder with Sweetshine.

Greencough then ravages the camp. Pureheart, Winterfall, Rivermist, and Jinglestep all get sick, and Foxtrot sends Mousetalon and Purplepaw to fetch catmint. During the journey, they encounter three FlameClan warriors stealing prey. Mousetalon fights two of them off, and Purplepaw manages to scare the other away by pretending she has deathberries. The pair finds the catmint, and they get back to camp on time. Rivermist almost dies.

Family
Mate: 

Mothfur, dark brown tabby tom with soft amber eyes

Mother: Leafshade, White she-cat with ginger patches and bold blue eyes

Father: Unknown, suspected to be Torchflight of GlowClan

Brothers: Littlestorm, dark gray tabby tom with fiery bluse eyes, Oatclaw, ginger tabby tom with soft green eyes

Sisters: Redfangs, jet black she-cat with blood red eyes, Pureheart, long haired white she-cat with black spots and bright blue eyes, Magiceyes, light gray she-cat with misty blue eyes and one white paw

Aunts: Sweetshine, gray spotted she-cat with green eyes, mentored Pureheart, Lovelyface, Pale ginger tabby with amber eyes

Uncles: Ashthorn, brown tom with bold green eyes, mentored Littlestorm

Kits: Purplepaw, brown she-cat with bright purple eyes, Songpaw, white tabby she-cat with green eyes, Blazepaw, brown tabby tom with blue eyes, Lionpaw, golden tabby tom with green eyes

Mentor Chart
Mousetalon, mentored by Echonose

Littlestorm, mentored by Ashthorn

Oatclaw, mentored by Kinklegs

Redfangs, mentored by Ferntail

Pureheart, mentored by Sweetshine

Magiceyes, mentored by Badgertooth

Mothfur, mentored by Jaggedfoot

Echostar, mentored by Jaypelt

Fogwhisker, mentored by Mousetalon

Silentstep, mentored by Mousetalon

Pantherpelt, mentored by Pinefur

Rivermist, mentored by Flintfur

Current Apprentices:

Purplepaw- Foxtrot

Songpaw- Fogwhisker

Lionpaw- Redfangs

Blazepaw- Dirtclaw

Harepaw- Vineflower

Fourpaw- Pantherpelt

Amethystpaw- Mousetalon

Tinypaw- Jinglestep

'More coming. . .'

FogClan Allegiances
Leader: Echostar

Deputy: Mousetalon

Medicine Cat: Foxtrot

Senior Warriors: Ashthorn, Badgertooth, Mothfur, Redfangs, Littlestorm, Kinklegs, Oatclaw

Warriors: Pureheart, Magiceyes, Dirtclaw, Silentstep, Fogwhisker, Vineflower, Oakpelt, Bloodclaw, Pinefur, Winterfall, Rivermist, Jinglestep, Pantherpelt

Apprentices: Purplepaw, Songpaw, Lionpaw, Blazepaw, Harepaw, Fourpaw, Amethystpaw, Tinypaw

Elders: Leafshade, Sweetshine, Lovelyface, Gladeheart, Slickfur, Flintfur, Coalfoot

Queens: Sweetfur

Kits: Talonkit, Joykit, Fangkit, Leopardkit

Mousetalon's Destiny
Prolouge:

"Torchflight?" the young she-cat called.

"Over here," the tabby tom answered softly.

"Hello," Sweetshine said, smiling.

"Where's Leafshade?" Torchflight demanded.

"You didn't hear? She's nursing your kits."

Chapter 1
"Mothkit!"

The tabby tom kit groaned, snuggling closer to his mother.

"Mothkit!"

"What, Mousekit!?" Mothkit hissed.

"Come on, I'm bored. Let's sneak out!" Mousekit said eagerly.

"The moon's out tonight," Redkit added, her scarlet eyes glittering.

"Are you crazy?" Mothkit shrieked.

"Sh!" the two she-kits hissed.

"Sorry. Fine, let's go."

The three kits crept outside. They were almost out of the camp when. ..

"Hey, you three!"

Mousekit groaned as two warriors padded up. One was a long haired dark brown tabby with misty blue eyes. The other was a gray and white tom with bold green eyes and a black ear.

"What are you doing out of the nursery?" the long-haired tabby asked.

"We were . . ." Mothkit began.

"Sneaking out?" the white and gray tom finished.

"We just wanted to explore . . ." Redkit began, but the she-cat silenced her with a glare.

"You are supposed to be sleeping," the she-cat said.

The three bowed their heads.

"You shouldn't be doing that, it can be dangerous," the tom scolded.

Mothkit nodded, and Mousekit rolled her eyes.

"Well, don't let it happen again," the tabby she-cat said, and padded away. The gray and white tom carried the two back to he nursery. Leafshade and Gladeheart were waiting for them.

"We're dead!" Mousekit squeaked. Redkit groaned. Leafshade narrowed her eyes.

"Being caught isn't punishment enough, for the rest of the moon you will serve the elders in whatever they need," Gladeheart told them. The three kits groaned. Littlekit giggled. Purekit looked down, her whiskers twitching in amusement. Oatkit laughed loudly, and Redkit hissed.

"Now go to the elders den," Leafshade instructed. The trio nodded, and padded out of the nursery. On their way across the camp, they bumped into the two warriors that had caught them.

"It's your fault we have to serve the elders," Mousekit spat angrily.

The tabby she-cat laughed.

"If you do a good job, Goldenrain might tell you a story," she said.

Mothkit and Mousekit brightened and Redkit pounced in anticipation.

The gray and white tom grinned.

"Come on, Echonose, let's go hunting," he suggested. Echonose nodded and the two sprinted toward the gorse tunnel.

"Now, settle down you two, and let me tell you the story of how FogClan came to be," Goldenrain, and aged golden tabby she-cat said ominously. Mothkit and Mousekit sat down and Redkit laid by Quailfur. "Now, long ago, there were four cats- Fogsong, Addertail, Flamepelt, and Glowingeyes. Their clan leader, Heavenstar had just died, but back then, there was no deputy. The four cats each wanted to lead SolarClan. So, a big battle took place. Friends clawed their friends' ears, and many cats died. In the end, many warriors died, and each of them came to the leaders, and ordered them to split. And they did- Cunning AdderClan, Mystical GlowClan, Swift FlameClan, and Noble FogClan."

About Me!!!!!
I L-O-V-E WARRIORS!!!

I am 12 going on 13. I love Warriors. So. . . I make charrie pixels now! Just leave a message on my talk page!

My Siggy Codes
) Mousetalon


 * ) Joy to the Mouse!!! Merry Christmas!!!


 * ) Talon of Mouse BOO!!!!!!


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Comments About Characters
Leafpool: Poor Leafpool. . . love you!

Hollyleaf: SO GLAD YOU'RE DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Yellowfang: Rock on!!!!!

Bluestar: Too awesome. ..

Firestar: Too perfect. And come on, Brambleclaw is NOT a traitor!!!!! And you love Spottedleaf because she smells good?!

Sandstorm: I like YOU!!!!! *gives hinting cough to Spottedleaf*

Onestar: It's okay to have friends, smart guy. ..

Berrynose: Hooker

Brambleclaw: FORGIVE HER ALREADY!!!!!

Squirrelflight: Poor thing. ..

Ashfur: Loved you. . . until you went crazy

Nightcloud: I'm not supposed to use that kind of language. ..

Darkstripe: You have to be really stupid if you thought you were going to StarClan. ..

Oakheart: Glad you and Bluestar can end up now. . . that you're dead. :(

Spottedleaf: You're very sweet, and obsessive. Get over Firestar!!!!

Breezepelt: You attacked your half-brother because. . .?

Longtail: Choose your friends better, dude.

Silverstream: YOU BROKE HIS HEART!!!!!

Goldenflower: Can't believe you liked him. ..

Tigerstar: You have serious issues, my enemy

Mistyfoot: Awesomeness just surrounds you. ..

Cinderpelt: So sad when you died. ..

Cloudtail: Don't tell me you STILL don't believe in StarClan?

Mini Rants/Food for Thought
What happens when Firestar and Sandstorm die, and go to StarClan? Is dumb Spottedleaf gonna try and steal him back? If she does. ..

Is Hollyleaf in the Dark Forest?

Speaking of Hollyleaf. Warrior Code, warrior code, OH GOD!!!! MY BIRTH IS AGAINST THE WARRIOR CODE!!!! MUST. . . DIE. . . MUST KILL. . . OWN. . . MOTHER. . . That's what goes through her head.