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Creekfeather (W) ~ Tweaked
Original artist was Elorisa. I basically just darkened the stripes and the shading. Comments? 22:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could basically re-do the stripes? They're bothering me. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then that would basically be redoing the whole thing, right? ... and darken the tail shading. 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Um, no, it would just be re-doing the stripes... 00:25, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

But redoing the stripes would mean erasing the stripes, and then adding stripes, and adding shading again, even if you used layers, the shading would have to be redone...whatever. 00:27, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What's with all the hostility lately? Define the shading a little more. 00:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Then the shading could be re-done, if possible. 00:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me :). But I'm not much help with this, I'm the original artist xD. Lighten the stripes a tad, they seem really dark :3. Looks great, Dapplecloud! Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, can you make that large circly stripe on the chest less circlish? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Dapplecloud? 02:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm still working on it. 00:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Then why don't you upload it? :3 23:55, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Dapple, can you please work on this? Otherwise, it'll get declined. 05:24, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define/darken the shading a little. -- 04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of like the stripes on the white, even if it isn't conventional. There's some blurred lineart on the ear. Define and brighten the earpink.  ❀ wild  heart ❀ 04:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Man HOW do you do that? awesome! But darken the shading. 04:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Heatherstar (L) - Redone
Here eye's kinda creep me out... Anyway, first leader charart up and ever since I first saw her's the highlight's have just been really bothering me. Redid the charart because the shading proved to be a real pain in the tail. Anyway, comments? 23:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make her eyes like they were. Make the nose a gray color since she was described as being gray (I think). Blur the shading a little more. (it's so much easier when the changes show to critique >~<) 23:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, make the earpink fill the ear to the line. Otherwise it's always gonna be small. 23:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Forgot to erase the waste around the head, I'll get rid of it later. @Ivy, she was described as pinkish-gray but I gave her a gray nose anyway. 23:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Dull the highlights a little, especially the chest and haunch. Also, blur the tail higlight. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:19, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

@Shadewing. I think you're looking at the wrong one. The changes aren't showing up now. 01:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry! xC Shadewing  Blades of the Night  01:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There's some waste around the head; delete those, and blur the shaidng more. Great job! 20:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are very blotchy. Make them smoother and move them upwards. 01:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Move the highlights on the tail more towards the middle.  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER The Peace is Perfect☯  03:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the left earpink bigger, they look kind of uneven. 16:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The light source doesn't seem very consistent. Move the chest highlight over a bit maybe? I don't know, it just seems kinda off. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:55, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Waste wrong the charart 04:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Runningstorm (K) ~ Redone
Redone as *shorthair, and to match other pixels. Since I did Runningstorm's warrior, might as well do his kit, eh? OA was Dawnfeather I believe. You know where to find the changes :P 00:12, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think you mean shorthair....xD brighten the earpink. Sky- Killer of Daleks 00:16, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Derp, *shorthair. Thanks x) 00:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the light part on the chest. Very nice! 01:38, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white part, pinken the earpink, and darken the shading. Good job! 20:34, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :) You know where to find the changes :D 22:05, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur the chest; it looks a bit blotchy. Nice work! 22:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :D 04:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute! The lighter chest looks like it's going off to the side a bit, though. 23:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) (W) - Redone
Original artist was Sandstar and later tweaked by Goldenpaw to have a torn ear. He was listed as needing tweaks for multiple things (as different entries), and I deemed it that the image pretty much needed redone, as it had shading issues and needed to actually be flecked, not just having circles. I hope he actually looks flecked (I used Ferncloud as a reference), but if he looks more mottled, I won't have a problem changing that if you guys think it's a problem. Comments for improvement? 02:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Ivy! he looks dazzling! Just define the shading a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:31, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dangit I just realized I didn't save an .xcf copy of this. And thanks! 16:46, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and foreleg. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:18, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and the need for that can be thanked due to my epic fail -_- 20:53, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

In Cats of the Clans, he is depicted with stripes near his eyes, legs, and paws.SShould we add those? 21:09, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

CotC has so many mistakes, I don't like those should be considered accurate. However, if you want to add them, go ahead. 21:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

The chest shading needs to be blurred, as well as the back shading. Also, define the flecks on his tail. Great job! 22:05, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You're seeing the right one, right? Because I just blurred it 22:08, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried the tabby stripes on him. 22:25, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry! I was looking at the wrong one. So, its the version with the stripes, right>? :3 Blur the stripes, and try making them not so straight. 22:34, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just added a few stripes that weren't straight, as I do not have the layers for this anymore. 22:43, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now they just look kinda messy xD Define them a bit, and change the eye. 01:58, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by change the eye? 02:14, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

He looks.......werid with the stripes, maybe make them smaller? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:41, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to redo this. I've been so overwhelmed these past few days with junk to do, and it didn't help that I lost the layers to this. 02:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

D: but it's so beautiful...  ❀ wild  heart ❀    02:52, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye like Lionblaze. Okay xD 14:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes should stay, though, if you are thinking about taking them away. Most spotted cats have stripes there. 15:58, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

But it sisn't in his desc, i don't think it should be added unless we get a ref for it(And he isn't spotted, she flecked.). Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:44, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and redone. Thanks Wildy, but I think it's much better now. And Maplepool, Iceheart says the stripes should say. I made them kinda like "ghost markings" though. 23:15, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Better! Change the eye. 23:18, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and darken the tail flecks. 23:25, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed his eye though. It should look right D: 23:32, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened flecks on tail 23:34, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the hightlights Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:36, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There aren't any highlights on this. But do you mean make the shading darker, then? 23:39, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I geuss. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:01, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not going to darken it any further because then he won't look pale gray. I downed the opacity by about 10 15:40, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pine(TS) (R)- Tweaked
Here, he is....i got bored with Pebblefoot.....so i withdrew him, and here is Pine, i just gave him battle-scars. *OA was Brambleclaw14 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:23, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cool scars. the pairs on his throat look akward. make some longer & shorter -- 02:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erase one scar on the haunch and make the pair further apart. Add depth to the eye. 02:26, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:30, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to add the OA, i feel so smart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:47, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit so it's not so candy-floss-pink, and sharpen the ends of the scars.  ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- At LAST, i hated the color of the ear-pink, and I did, it is because the are blurred so much it looks that way.I took the ear-pink clor from Cloudtail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Remove one scar from the chest. 14:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Aww but i LIKE his scars xD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:34, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

xD Make the two scars on the chest further apart, please. 15:56, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hutch (KP) - Redone
Here's Hutch. OA was Ashshadow, and it needed to be lightened, but when I tried to lighten it, it looked kind of green, and I couldn't properly adjust the saturation to make it a normal shade of brown again. The stripes were kind of unrealistic to begin with. Comments? <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    02:52, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, i'm not sure if it will be declined or not..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:53, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. I'm archiving one of them anyways. It stays. Wonderful work, Wildheart! I missed looking at your chararts. =) 02:55, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then, i did to, define the shading a bit. so good to see you again :) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:56, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aw, thanks, guys :3 I didn't know what you mean, Maplepool, so I darkened the shading instead. <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:05, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

That is what define is anyway :P Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:17, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, awesome job!! Pinken the earpink -- 02:44, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Bloo :3 <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild  <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! All I see is that you need to add depth to the eye. 14:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, cute! Make the nose stand out a little more from the pelt. 15:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 <span style="background:#EAFAE8; color: #3DD5FF; font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;">05:36 Sep 25 Sun

Olivenose (A) - Redone
First tortie! I didn't like Ravenpaw, so I moved on to this. Original artist was Icethroat, and the patches needed to be redone Comments? 04:32, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is your first? Wow! Can you make the white match the white on her warrior image. They look a tad different. This is amazing, btw. I think I'll leave the torties to the rest of you. 04:45, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the orange patches just a tad. Not so that they're as bright as the original image, but so they're not so dull. This is amazing for your first tortie! 05:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

No. I really doubt this isn't your first tortie. This is amazing. Lighten the arms and the belly shading - and the muzzle shading. It makes it look like it has blurred lineart. 14:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the shoulder shading/highlight. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 15:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix it when I'm home. And I've done practice torties before, so I should say this is my first tortie for PCA. I don't usually thank people for compliments, but thanks! 17:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

AMAZING! Darken the eyes, they're a bit neon right now, and define the earpink a bit. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:36, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (W) - Redone
I was the original artist, and it needed to be long-haired. Comments? <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 15:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Looks wonderful, actually. Can you dull the highlights ever so slightly though? (like, maybe a percentage or two) 15:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- you know where the changes are XD. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 15:40, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the shading a little. 15:56, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks, both of you. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 16:04, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower (A) ~ Redone
OA was Bramble. Comments? 18:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eye colour a tad. Lookin' good ;) <span style="background:#EAFAE8; color: #3DD5FF; font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;">05:49 Sep 25 Sun

Crookedstar - Tweaked
OA was Bramble, then it was tweaked by Ivystripe. So, his stripes weren't all that realistic, and where was he mentioned with cream transistions? I re-did the stripes and played the shading, and removed the cream parts. Comments? 03:08, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Though this looks great, I'm kinda sad to see the old image go. That was one of my favorite leader ianges. :P But anyways, his does look great! Make the tooth white, make his eyes pale green *they needed to be changed before) and make the tabby M thicker. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:53, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Oops, I didn't know that was the tooth! Well, I made it white and darkened the eyes. 03:57, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Is it really needed, to completely redo so many chararts that only need small tweaks? Nothing against you, Icestorm: this looks nice, but it just seems like every tweak you take on you restart from scratch when ypu just need to, in this case at least, take out the cream. Maybe at least use the same brown as before? And some of the stripes transition oddly, one going from his back leg to his front leg to his chest. 04:46, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart, I did ot re-do it. I did ot restart from scratch, I stated my reasons above. Yes, I altered the base pelt because it looked more of a...eh, how do I explain it...more of a muddish brown 05:15, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, lay off a bit. Icestorm works hard on her chararts, and I wouldn't be surprised if she felt offended by your comment. There was something odd about the old brown used on Crookedstar anyways. I re-did Mudfur for that exact same reason, and I don't see you telling me off. 05:21, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I was not telling anyone off, Cloudy. I'm sorry, Icestorm, if I came off that way. I was only pointing out that you overwork yourself redoing all of these from scratch when you don't need to. I do think your chararts look fine. Please don't take my statements as ones of anger or malice, I only mean to help. I just thought the old brown suited Crookedstar more. 05:33, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

The brown he used to have was more reddish/orange-brown, when Crookedstar is supposed to be a light brown. The stripes look a little different, but, that's Icey's style. 05:37, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

He was light brown >.>. I'm with Shellheart on this one. All he needed was the cream removed. It doesnt matter what the stripes looked like before. Redoing it is just making more work. If you are so worried about hard work going to waste, why not try redoning an image that acctually on the redoing list? 05:44, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Don't go whining at me, thank you. I only re-do images I personally feel need to be redone. He was not light brown. That had quite a tinge of orange and red in it. Wait. Why am I defending someone else's work? 05:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Everybody relax. I did not re-do it. He was not light brown. He was tawny-orangish-brown. If you don't believe me, go get on GIMP and look. Hard work? This is what Tweak Week is about. To make images better. Not "OMG THIS IS MORE WORK SO LIEK LET'S JUST ERASE IT." And no cat has triangle stripes, thanks for asking. 15:02, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wow.....why is everyone so hostile lately? Chill guys, don't bite each other's heads off. The is a pixil of waste above his ears, get rid of that. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:11, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

He looked light brown and cream to me. Eh. Make the "M" as a stripe that goes all the way up, as the stripe that tabby cats have end as an "M" but is a stripe that goes all the way up their head. 15:21, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Shadow (L) - Tweaked
Comments? 06:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the OA, and what needed to be tweaked? 06:36, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well aren't I smart? :P Shading needs major blurring. Original artist- MosspathOfSkyClan. 06:38, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlight a bit & blur it -- 06:40, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten up said shading a bit? Pretty please? 06:41, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes a tad and blur the haunch highlight. Looks good :3 <span style="background:#EAFAE8; color: #3DD5FF; font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;">06:42 Sep 25 Sun

Cutee! Lighten the entire image. 14:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

River (Leader) (L) - Redone
Otterheart was finally approved! XD Anyways, originally by Insane, and the shading was pretty blotchy and needed to be blurred. I wasn't quite sure what shade silver-gray would be, so I just chose a lightish grey and made it look kinda sleek and shiny like silver. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:19, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I really like it! Can you make the nose a tad darker? 15:00, September 25, 2011 (UTC)