Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 45

Tadpole (Ki) - Approved
A moment ago, I accidentally added this section in the approved chararts archive. *facepalm* Well, now that I've removed it from the wrong place and put it in the right one, constructments? -- ĦĄω ĸ†ɑ  £ƟȠ  20:52, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, the many attempts of Tadpole. xD Look's great. Just blur the highlight on the chest a tad. ♪  B  a  t   ♫  21:07, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred highlight. -- ĦĄω ĸ†ɑ  £ƟȠ  21:19, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? -- ĦĄω ĸ†ɑ  £ƟȠ  17:53, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything, I'd CBA this if I could. ♪  B  a  t   ♫  19:50, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐S aN  dY  21:00, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Shellheart (D) Approved
Ah, finally. He's been finished for forever, I was just waiting for the image number to go down. Okay, how is he?-- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 20:14, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. This is wonderful! Maplefern Carrying the torch... 20:21, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 06:54, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect to me. CBA? ✐S aN  dY  22:18, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Whitewing (A) - Approved
This is my first charart, Whitewing as an apprentice! I had a little trouble with the blurring (running into the lines XP). Comments?-- Snowflight  1  Snowflight + Finchfeather 4ever!!  19:15, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty good! Just try blurring the shading more. The ear pink is fine--  Night shine   ♥  19:23, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I blurred the shading. I think the first one is better :P. -- Snowflight  1  Snowflight + Finchfeather 4ever!!  19:46, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the shading on her back a bit more and it should be good--  Night shine   ♥  19:49, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I blurred the shading on the back. How is it?-- Snowflight  1  Snowflight + Finchfeather 4ever!!  20:05, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, but it looks a bit more gray than white. Try lightening the entire image some with the dodge tool. -- Ic et hr o at   Happy  Valen  tine's   Day! 22:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened it. How is she?-- Snowflight  1  Happy V-Day!!  15:19, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:32, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred all the shading. Anything else?-- Snowflight  1  Happy V-Day!!  22:45, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

She still looks a bit gray and the shading needs to be blurred more. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:51, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading and lightened it.-- Snowflight  1  Happy V-Day!!  21:54, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good to me--  Night shine   ♥  17:42, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Me too :) CBA? LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 22:57, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefur (Ki) - Approved
Evanphoto 00:47, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink brighter, and she looks crosseyed. Dark hallows 01:01, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, I can barely see it. Ice Happy Valentines! 01:05, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 15:00, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there's something at the bottom of the right paw. It might be my computer though. It's like a little gray spot under the paw.-- Snowflight  1  Happy V-Day!!  20:15, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 20:54, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just darken the ear pink a touch, and I can't really see the nose color. ♪  B  a  t   ♫  20:49, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 21:22, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with it.--  Night shine   ♥  17:39, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  22:41, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) - Approved
Well here he is!! I really wanted to do him...love the color of his pelt! Ii know it's over the limit but there are charats about to be approved and some discussion questions-so it's good. Comments? Critics?

21:31, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is that maybe the ear pink should be more tringular. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 21:33, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Also make the ear pink a little more red. Blur the shading on the chest and tail a bit more--  Night shine   ♥  00:14, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

If you blur the shading, I don't think there will be anything else that needs improving. ^^ ♫ Misty ♫ 14:09, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Could you lighten the ear pink a bit? It's a little hard to see. Good job on this :) ♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:15, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- fixed the ear and blurred the shading as much as I could. 20:02, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  22:44, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Timberfur (W) - Approved
Comments? ♫ Mistyheart ♫ 09:57, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Misty! Blur the shading quite abit though and make the ear pink a bit smaller! Fawnstorm 10:00, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried to blur shading and decreased earpink. :) ♫ Mistyheart ♫ 10:14, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Good! Did you put any Highlights on the tail? I can't see any! XD! Fawnstorm 10:21, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Do short-haired cats need highlights on the tail? XD ♫ Misty ♫ 10:49, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Don't know but try it anyway and see if it looks OK! Fawny 10:55, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more and yes, most people put highlights on the tails of short haired cats. Haikage Ash's Talk 11:41, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thats what I though! XD! Fawny 11:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added highlights and blurred as much as possible. What else do I need to do? ♫ Misty ♫ 14:01, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his front leg. The part that isn't shaded stands out a bit! Fawny 14:54, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried to blur the shading on the leg. ♫ Misty ♫ 17:11, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  22:44, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)