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Darkstripe (W) ~ Redone
Comments? 02:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Gray background...? 02:03, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

It's gone. 02:05, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the base pelt color and the stripes 02:06, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

...Stupid uploading problems. Well, it's gone, and OA was Bluestar1776 and redone/tweaked by Shimmerpool. Shading and stripes needed to be redone. 02:08, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:10, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 02:25, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a lot and make sure the pattern matches up completely with the loner image. 09:27 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded. I darkened and blurred the stripes (they needed blurring), and blurred the neck shading. Comments? 17:12, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wow! Can you make stripes darker more? 18:29, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

They (stripes) look too blurred next to the other images, can you fix that? ^^ Sky Watchu want? 02:26, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also darkened the main pelt color. -- 06:04, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps lighten up the black on the muzzle a tad, I can't see the lineart o3o Sky Watchu want? 01:49, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

You know what, it says he's a dark gray-black tabby, so shouldn't his base coat be much darker on all his images? It's silver right now. That's nothing link dark gray-black. Would you mind tweaking it on here since it's up right now anyways? 22:58, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think this is good. 00:30, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Where was he called dark gray-black? It needs to be cited. 00:34, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I just checked the page cited for that. He isn't called dark grey-black. Change it back.  00:39, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I think he was mentioned as a dark gray tabby, not gray, or gray-black. But I'll follow the description, whatever it is. 00:40, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I see now. In Into the Wild allegiances, he's described as a sleek black-and-gray tabby tom. 00:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

That was referring to his base color being grey and his stripe color being black. 00:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Alright. Reuploaded. 00:52, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well since it says just gray in his description now, can you make the base coat match the other images? It's a bit dark right now. 07:59, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 06:33, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (KP) - Tweaked
White needed to be blurred. OA = Sunspirit with a tweak by Wild. I just stuffed it up more. 03:49, Sun, Jan, 22, 2012

Can you define the shading on the white part of the face? 01:04, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink a bit more visible? 13:18, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

And blur it a tad more? 22:34, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  02:15, Tue, Jan, 24, 2012

there's an odd white spot at the very top of the head. Can you fix it?  Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  05:01, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Changes aren't showing. 01:53, Wed, Jan, 25, 2012

Define the transition between white and gray and smudge it a bit to match the warrior version. 02:08 Thu Jan 26

Reuploaded -  Better? Or should I smudge/blur it more? 08:18, Thu, Jan, 26, 2012

I'd redraw the gray and white border and re-smudge it and then blur it. Smudge it with the smallest brush possible. Right now it's kinda blotchy. 02:26 Fri Jan 27

It looks as if some of the white leaked into the left eye. (the bottom of the eye) 20:36, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Alt. Ki) - Redone
Okay, this was on the list for redoing because the stripes needed to be redone...The OA was Goldenpaw with a change of the nose by Ivy. I'm not such a big fan of it...Comments? 17:50, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

I love this <3 Lighten the nose. 23:36, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - PSE was finally nice to me. :P It made this image. :3 23:44, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little. You so good... Sky Watchu want? 23:58, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lies. 00:01, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft. When do I lie except all the time? Darken the earpink a tad. :P Sky Watchu want? 00:19, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I knew you lied. :P Naw, anyway, comments? 00:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Sagefur.kit.alt. 20:08, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Whut. Don't mind me. Leave it be ^^ 20:09, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blank pixels. :o Changes may or may not be showing. 22:12, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure all the shading is the same darkness. 02:03 Thu Jan 26

Er...What? *doesn't understand that* :3 02:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * The shading is all a very dark gray... 02:16, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well the shading should be solid on the back near the hind paw. It doesn't look solid. <span style="">02:24 Fri Jan 27

Reuploaded 15:04, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-reuploaded - There was some waste. 15:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the head and the shading doesn't look consistent on the haunch. It should be pretty solid. <span style="">06:26 Sat Jan 28

Reuploaded - I redid the shading-it's the same as my Tawnypelt alt. 06:34, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Bella (KP) - Tweaked
Bahahahaa. Tweaked patches and defined shading. OA=Sandstar 03:51, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

No need to go nuts xD Blur the smudging a wee bit? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 04:21, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I cant blur them without overblurring them. This is one of the reason pixlr sucks 06:08, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can't you lower the ocupancy (major spelling fail) of the blurr brush? 12:03, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

...you can do that? ._. 15:21, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Not in pixlr I don't think. You can lower the rate, but not the opacity. They're two different things. Gimp can lower both. :P <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  16:30, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the depth in her eyes? 19:42, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Aha! You admit Pixlr sucks! 8D Can you make the brown less greeny? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 20:21, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tabby spot on her head 01:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - lolwhut? Whats "pixlr"? *Trollface* 01:55, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Now this is a tweak. Blur the stripes on the left a tad. 03:36, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the brown on her face by her eye to match the other patches. Pixlr is that terrible thing uou se, claiming it to be good :P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 04:38, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar, you just had to make that comment, didn't you? Lighten the nose colour. 03:05, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Moon, be nice now. Don't start anything. Is it just me or is the shading placement on the brown different than on the white? 0.o 04:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well, she said that rude comment. 18:28, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well you could have just ignored it. So enough. If you still have something to say, take it to the talk pages or outside the wiki. This isn't helping the image at all. 21:21, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I don't understand how that is a rude comment. Can you lighten the tag a little? 04:43, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Do you mean the whole collar or just the tag? 05:44, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just the tag I think. The collar looks fine. 15:44, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Henry (KP) ~ Redone
Was on the Tweak list for being redone. OA was Bramble. This is horrible >:U 21:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Not. Horrible. Great. Is there a tabby M? If it's those two lines then disregard this... 21:33, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's just two lines. 21:36, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the back lines more maybe use the eye ref. on the tutorial, and darken the shading under his 'arm' 22:34, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think you should darken the overall shading. 00:29, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I was kind of confused about what you said, Wild. 03:07, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

And about the eyes, I copied 'em off of CLoudtail. 03:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look kind weird though, like his eyes are bugging out about a worm on the ground or something. Could you copy off the tutorial? They look more natural on there. 05:26, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes and thicken them. ,15:18,January 25,2012 (UTC)

I meant smudge the stripes into the fur, and the part where the belly meets the front arm there should be some shading, and use the PCA charart tutorial use the eye chart. 15:42, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. You guys were right abou tthe eyes xD 21:48, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the tail? <span style="">00:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the end of the stripes, darken the shading, add depth to the eyes, and add a couple more stripes to the legs. <span style="">01:55 Thu Jan 26

Lighten/define the earpink some more, too. I can barely see it. o3o 02:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes even more (smudge their points so they're sharper and less rounded at the ends) and add some more depth to the eyes. <span style="">03:44 Fri Jan 27

Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Windflight (E) ~ Redone
Eh... Not sure if this looks like a tabby. It was on the redo list. OA was Minnowclaw. Comments? 05:56, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think you smudged it too much. 12:05, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Just add some stripes to his ears. 15:24, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oh sweet! Thank you Shelly :D 15:40, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink he's super cute :) 15:44, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Wild 8D 15:48, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes...I dun know, it looks like a mottled tabby... 03:20, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can't really do that without messing up the design o3o If someone agrees, I will. 04:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Just erase a bit between the stripes and blur it. It should be fine. 04:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:33, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Ehh... maybe blur the stripes just a tiny bit more. 23:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded People on chat said that he looked mottled so I redid the stripes. 01:00, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I like this one better <3. Lighten the back shading a *tad*. 12:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you silver ^^ 14:59, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (L) - Redone
I still despie Brokenstar cause of the whole Badgerpaw thing, but maybe this will make me like him more. ;D He was a triangle tabby and needed to be redone. OA was Bramble, with tweaks by Moonflight and Iceheart, then a redo by Mountainheart. :) Comments? 04:19, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is loverly<3 Just define the earpink a tad. =3 01:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It's too cute, your making me like him! >:(, XD smudge the earpink to fur in the left (<---) ear. And no more making evil characters cute. :) 02:52, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 21:52, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

He stares into your soul so you must obey his commands. :P If there's a light part on that tail, define it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 06:31, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) - Tweaked
Edited shadings..first true OA is Shaf Girl, then Bramble and Cloudskye ,15:49,January 26,2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of white on the side, and the flank shading is darker than the rest. Could you either darken the rest or lighten that part? This is lovely. :) 22:13, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, reuploaded ,18:26,January 27,2012 (UTC)

Littlebird (E) ~ Tweaked
It needed to be less neon and bright.. I don't think changes are showing. :P 20:27, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't realise I went over the limit >.< 20:29, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Don't worry, we all do that sometimes. XD Declining for now. You can repost when it's under the limit again. :P 21:19, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Its okay now. :3 23:05, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Why did she have white on her before? 0.o That wasn't artist's choice till recently.... Anyways, could you lighten it? And maybe make it a bit orange tinted, it makes it look more natural. 02:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the "highlights" 02:30, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the highlights, lightened it, and made it more orange.
 * That was me. .3.  01:34, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) (Alt. Ki) - Redone
Hmm... wonder what this will get declined for... Original artist was LightMoon, and it was a triangle tabby. 23:22, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:26, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I loove this Moon!♥ Define the earpink. 23:27, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

It also seems like there's a stripe in the earpink? not completely sure that's what it is, it just looks like it. I couldn't tell it was earpink at first, so could you make it completely solid? And darken the shading. 23:32, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's just the dark part of the earpink. If you really want it removed, I could on the next reupload. 23:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 23:52, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also blurred the shading. 00:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

There appears to be some waste abover her left ear. Can you remove that? x3 01:41, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It has a purplish tint to it. Could you alter the base color a bit to fix this? Up the orange in your brown to make a more chocolatey color. 01:44, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does this look better? 18:05, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Ki) ~ Redone
Sorry this is sloppy Dx OA was Quietstep with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart. Comments? 23:25, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, why do none of her images match her leader image? I just noticed they're all far too dark. 03:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  12:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 15:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) ~ Redone
Redone to match his apprentice. Haha, I'll never have a simple design for Redwillow! Anyway, I got permission from Scarlet a while ago when I did his apprentice charart. OA was Maplefern with tweaks/redos by Cloudskye, Icestorm, and me. 23:39, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful <3 Blur the earpink a tad. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the earpink a little 23:49, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Comments? 23:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason for tweaking? 23:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:45, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I was getting there OA Sandstar12 needed to match others 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome, blur the earpink. 23:50, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, this is over the limit Wildfire. You can post again when there's space. 23:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Ignore me, I was looking at the table of contents and there's a blank heading for some reason. You're fine. XD Sorry. :P 23:56, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Greeneyes (D) ~ Redone
She had triangle stripes, and the OA was Echomist. Comments? 03:27, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to blur the stripes more? 03:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

This is a perfect classic tabby... well done. Maybe make the eyes a lighter green to make them pop more. 03:32, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Redden/define the ear-pink 03:33, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't blur the stripes any more, because the smaller ones then disappear and look really blotchy. Dx 03:53, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes a little? I know you're going for that classic tabby, but it's starting to border on silver tabby and lightening the base will make it look dark grey. Breeze whisker  13:02, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

And make teh earpink bigger. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 00:13, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow. Her color was inapprorpiate for her description, but the image was overall green tinted and in my opinion, the shading was too dark. I'm thinking about making the base color even lighter since she's a dusty brown, but your opinions? Also eee I finally snagged a sharpclaw! <3 07:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad 23:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 15:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Tornear (W) ~ Redone
Here's Tornear. That texture you see is fur that I did on a different layer. It's kind of plain I know, but I'll probably redo him. 12:00, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be a little longer. Nice job.^^ 12:02, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry I forgot the OAs. OAs are Bramble, Goldenpaw, and Sandstar12. 12:25, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you. Change it if you redid it. =P 15:19, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It was redone, Ivy. 20:46, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

He should have stripes on the tail. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 03:49, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Trying to match his elder. 17:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) ~ Tweaked
First tweak, and I'm not proud of it. He needed patchy fur. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire Comments? 12:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, it looks good. ^.^ Could you perhaps blur where the skin meets the fur...? Where it meets looks too sharp. 13:13, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The patches look like you're doing them fo ra cat with long fur. Try looking at Spiderstar's leader image for an example of a patch in short fur. Also, they look pretty red, when he probably has pale skin considering his fur color. Contrary to popular belief, they don't need to match his ear pink. 14:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ew. 15:16, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Kay, maybe not that pale. Also... my point in linking to Spiderstar was to show that the patches really don't need to be outlined. Just blur them in to look like fur, not chipped paint. 17:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And no, the patches are not the same color as the ear pink. I just darkened the skin color. 17:28, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the skin, as you would the earpink on an apprentice or leader. 17:30, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorreltail (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match her other images. Gotta say, I love Sorreltail's design. OA was Insanular. Comments? 15:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the sides of the patches a little more. Nice ^^ 15:18, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Ewww! Awesome job! Define the ear pink please ,17:01,January 27,2012 (UTC)

Leafstorm, ewww? XD And specifically define the one on our left. 23:08, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Haha ewwww. XD Can you make the black go a bit farther on her haunch? 00:05, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Crowfur (E) - Redone
OA Honeyfur got permission from Paleclaw because the shading was hard to wrok with. <span style="">17:10 Fri Jan 27

Don't forget the graying muzzle. ;D 20:26, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe dull down them patches of skin? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 21:23, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

 Re-uploaded. Added muzlle. The patches of skin were off his elder form before.... <span style="">22:43 Fri Jan 27

Dunno...but blur the muzzle more? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 02:30, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink too. 02:33, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Splashheart (L) - Tweaked
Okay, so apparently his highlights needed to be blurred Even though there wasn't any... so I just redid the shading. OA was me; I had the .xcf, so this is tweaked. 18:31, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and I don't know what it meant by "eyes need to be more amber" so I didn't change it. They look pretty amber to me. 18:32, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. 18:45, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The eye slook yellow to me. 20:27, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I added some orange. Better? 20:38, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Looks pretty nice! 23:07, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (A) ~ Redone
It needed to be redone to match the warrior. OA was Honeyfur and was redone with the new blanks by DJ. I breaks my heart to redo her epic image D'X sowry DJ. Comments? 05:31, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (Q) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be redone. OA was Bramble with a redo by Golden. Changes may or may not be showing. Comments? 05:47, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Pretty. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 06:05, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks. 06:12, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (W) - tweaked
before any of you start raging on me, I was supposed to put the lineart over the old image. Check the discussions if you dont believe me. OA = Nightshine with a redo by Mistystar 05:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt W) ~ Redone
Hey look, he's back! 8D OA=Nightshine with redo by Iceheart, same reasons as I stated earlier... Comments? 05:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I was sorta hoping he'd stay away...kidding. Lighten up the tail shading a bit. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 06:04, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) ~ Redone
He needed a redo because he was a triangle tabby before. OA was Bracken. Breeze whisker  06:12, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Goregeous. Define the earpink? 06:14, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

So good >.> Does he have a lighter chest? If it does, it beeds blurring cause it looks sharp. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 06:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  15:27, January 28, 2012 (UTC)