Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Stick (Lo) ~ Withdrawn
aggressively loves ragged fur and scraped pelts (oa was snowman) 03:49, May 23, 2013 (UTC)

Since you have the file, can you make the shading a little less flat? Like, on the legs, it's really flat and it bothers me.

I'm going to have to withdraw this, as my laptop has died and I have neither the file nor GIMP on this one. 01:05, May 26, 2013 (UTC)

Can I take over? 23:33, May 26, 2013 (UTC)

Floss (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA be a one DJAngelCandy, tweaked to make her gray paler. Comments? Bb un   legs  16:15, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Dunno whether you could do something with the white to make it look less grey could ya? 10:18 Tue May 28

I think it's fine, but hey, if someone disagrees, I'll go try to find a way ^^;;. Bb un   legs  21:11, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Although parts of it are fine, I think some areas like her stomach, back leg, neck, and tail could be brightened up. 21:17, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Give a bit more variation to the shading on her left hind leg 22:24, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  22:44, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

The gray should be paler, imho. Perhaps not as pale as Cloudstar, but this still looks like a neutral gray.

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  22:54, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

The white is still really gray.

Re-up. Also defined the belly shading a bit, as it was starting to creep away from the lineart. Bb un   legs  19:49, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight on the white 02:04, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Smoky (KP) - Redone
OAs were me and Wild. Unrealistic pattern, etc. Comments? 00:27, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the gray a bit to match the loner? Bb un   legs  00:31, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

It's color-picked from the loner's file. 00:32, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

I think there shuld be white on his chin. 00:54 Tue May 28

Re-uploaded 01:00, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Put a bit of gray at the tips of the ears, right now it looks like he has pink-tipped ears xD 22:25, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:24, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts? c:  03:58, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just fiddled with the shading to hopefully make it more noticeable. 21:31, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Ro) - Tweaked
OA was Berry, color didn't look brown. Comments? 00:30, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts a bit? 03:55, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think that they're fine. 21:29, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

I have to agree with Misty on this one. Perhaps define it only a tad, though?

Re-uploaded 21:56, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Floss (KP) ~ Tweaked
Just ran over the grey layer with a dodge tool. OA is myself. 10:09 Tue May 28

Same as the loner, I think the gray should be paler.

There's also waste on our left next to his head. 12:48 Wed May 29 2013

There seems to be a bit of shading on the belly that looks like a patch of darker color. Could you blur it a bit? 03:54, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Sunstar (Star) - Tweaked
OA was myself, tweaked stripes to match better and shading to be less flat. I redid stripes and shading in order to do these things, and I swear he is not redone. Please don't shoot me... 21:53, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Could you perhaps tone down his ginger a bit to match his other image, and blur the stripes a tad more? If not, cool with me. Bb un   legs  21:55, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Thin and sharpen the stripes a bit more 22:26, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Played with the ginger color a bit, and then thinned out the stripes and added a couple more in to match better. Not sure whether to blur them or sharpen, but I think thinning out the stripes sharpened them up a bit. 18:34, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

Try lightening the stripes, to see if they match better. Also, blur the paw(our right), chest, and haunch/belly thing shading a tad to make it blend more. Could you also define it(shading) a bit more? It looks a bit flat. 03:52, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Mottlepaw (A) ~ Redone
still not used to this bloody laptop ergh anyway it was redone because of issues, and I tried to make him look more like his old image xD 02:29, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

Just wondering, how come the texture is only on the shading and not on the other parts of his body? Could you lighten it a little bit? (the texture) 02:49, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine as is. 06:34 Wed May 29

I agree with Ivy~ 11:50, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

I didn't texture the shading, its just that I used the paintbrush tool. But I'll lighten it and stuff. 11:52, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried 01:34, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Bone (R) ~ Redone
guys I saved it as Boner help me Redone for multiple reasons, OA was Loonie 07:55 Wed May 29

He needs the claws, doesn't he? hahahaha  10:55, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd think he needs them... Also very sexy collar thank you for keeping it rainbow. omfg berry wai

He looks a tad hard-edged, both in texture and shading, could you blur it a teeny tiny bit? 15:49, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

Sootfur (Star) ~ Tweaked
Ah, my very first image! OA be me, tweaked for that little shading and earpink. I redid the shading and smudged the earpink a bit more. Anyways, comments? Bb un   legs  19:45, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the highlight spot on the chest 02:03, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) ~ Redone


Here's Piketooth, he needed a more realistic pattern, and shading didn't make sense. OA was me, tweaked by Wild and Stoner, I think. I feel redeemed. Changes may or may not be showing. I think shading might need to be defined, so aside from the shading, comments? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 22:03, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading tons and blur the earpink. 22:04, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge his pale underbelly a bit? Bb un   legs  22:12, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt.mc) ~ Redone
muuuuuuch happier with this. Redone because it had quite a few issues. 01:46, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! c: Define the shading, it looks flat and maybe define the pale markings on the face and earpink a bit more 02:02, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Leafpool (Lo) - Tweaked
OA be me. Lessened the shading on the belly, darkened the shading on the tabby areas to clear flatness, and I also lessened the white belly, cause t'was somewhat massive for a cat that's described as "slender" 02:01, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

White's still looking a bit gray. She looks much better now, Scar~