Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 71

Rosetail (A) ~ Redone
Phew. Finally it would let me upload it. (For some reason technical difficulties were happening.. Sorry for the lateness.) The most recent OA I believe would be me. c: 05:39, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. Bbun (talk) 16:12, March 3, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Reuploaded She might be a bit too dark... But I also got rid of a stray pixel. 22:23, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes on her back don't flow that way on the other images. 22:44, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

The light source doesn't make any sense, the shading should be tinted a lot to match, the stripe color needs to be changed to match, and the eyes given depth.

Still working, Misty? 07:28, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ah, yes - sorry about that. I've seem to overdone it on the procrastination this time. xD I redid the whole thing, and I'll probably do the shading again once I get the colors from Beebs. 04:01, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe fill in the gaps on her back with more stripes? 01:48, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps tint the shading to make the color match more. 01:54, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but if I add more stripes, it won't match her other images, and I'm redoing the shading soon since I just didn't have the colors before ^^ 01:24, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

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Mousewhisker(Ki) - Redone
I fail. Redone for overblurredness I got the warrior's file from Breezy, so at least the colors should match. 19:11, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge the white more to match the warrior. Be e   bs  19:29, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:51, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Thin out the shading on the face, it covers a lot of it, darken the shading, and try smudging it to match the warrior?

Re-uploaded 00:33, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

There a bit of waste, can you erase it, please? . 04:57, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the leg shading.

Re-uploaded 13:31, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

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Hoot (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA be Trollington, tweaked to add his white ear. Comments? Be e   bs  00:19, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

The earpink looks like a different color on the ear that you tweaked. Also, I know this wasn't what it was nominated for, but do you think that you could define the shading a tad on his tail? 00:43, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. The earpink probably looks different due to the shading. Be e   bs  00:49, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

The earpink just looks like a black splotch. Make it the same as the other ear.

Re-up. Be  e   bs  18:17, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Still looking black. But then again it could be the changes.

The changes probably aren't showing yet, might want to wait a bit. Be e   bs  18:35, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

No I see the changes in the file history, it's redder now but still looking blackish. Just make it the same color as the other ear.

Re-up. Be  e   bs  01:15, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

The earpink's on the white side is lighter than on the black now, the white needs to be blurred a bit, and it shouldn't leak out on <<< side.

Re-up. I am trying. Be e   bs  23:12, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

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Speckletail (E) - Redone
Kay so I'm a fail at life and can't really match my own pattern, but I figured I'd give it another shot since nobody seems to be doing her images and they've been sitting a while. Everything matches her warrior down to the shading opacities. Redone to match. Last OA was Stoner. Comments?

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Broken Shadow (SC) - Redone
Wee~ Last OA was Mistystar, I think.  Comments 04:06, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Tint the shading some more? It's making the ginger a tad funky colored.

Re-uploaded 01:27, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

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Whitethroat (W) ~ Redone
OA was me, and it had...issues, to say the least.

Smudge the chest a bit more and make the ends less round. It looks very paintbrushy.

Re-uploaded.

Add neck shading to the white?

Re-uploaded. There was shading there, but it was like...super faint and you couldn't really see it.

24 hours 16:03, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Mudclaw (WC)  (W) - Tweaked
Added mottles to match the deputy image more. I just realized I forgot to erase the waste, so I'll get that on the re-upload. . 04:55, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

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