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Petalnose (Q) - Tweaked
- Re-did did shading and brightened highlights. I tried a new way of doing shading, and I like it x3. Please don't tell me to blur the shoulder highlight. It can't be blurred anymore. 23:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's a bit dark compared to her other images. 23:56, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Nice! Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's because of the shading + highlights. Er, Re-Uploaded xD 00:38, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste around the charart around her haunch area. Make the earpink bigger. 01:04, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see the waste on GIMP 02:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can see it, want me to circil it for you? If not, It is under her foot, under her belly, near her foot, and above her back. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

OH I know why it isnt showing you, because, it is so pale, it looks like it isn't there, but if you lean in close, you can see it, it is there, but just BARLEY there. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:48, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

It is not there at all on GIMP. I can't fix it if I can't see it. 21:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

When I had a hard time seeing the waste on my Ivypool image, I put a colored background behind her as a new layer, maybe that could help you see it? Because I could never see it when people told me until I did that 22:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Where's the light source? I can't really tell... and darken the tail shading. 19:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's some shading waste above and below her back leg. 20:34, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I darkened the tail shading. Shellheart, I can't remove it because no matter how close I look in GIMP, it's not there. 13:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I can remove it for you, want me to? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:08, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm shall be gone until August 25th, so please don't decline this due to lack of work ;3 00:41, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I know it isn't your problem, but can you define the earpink? 16:59, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt. W) - Tweaked
The original artist was Feathermoon. I just made him gray. 03:19, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Darken the shading a tad and add/darken the shading under the chin. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 03:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:27, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can see a bit of waste around the head and neck. Please erase it that this'll be pretty much ready. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 03:40, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yay. :) 03:47, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wouldn't it just be his default warrior image, since we went with the silver description only with his elder charart? 12:43, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around. But the image looks good! @Shellheart, Longtail's alt. warrior is for the period of time when he was not an elder, but he had been attacked by the rabbit and had scars. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:26, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

He was attacked in FQ, there is a slighty waste under his forepaw closest to us, and und his haunch, and darken the shading a tad, I can't see it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 15:55, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe. One of Feathermoon's chararts. xD Anyways, good job Rainy. I know you're not required to do this, but...umm... Can you thicken the lineart by the nick in his ear? It seems too thin. 18:30, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Other than that, it looks good. 19:00, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The waste isn't showing on my comp... Can you specify where I missed it? 04:17, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's some between the ears, along the spine, and on the underside of the tail. Maybe go into the shading layer and fill the background with a color to see if the waste shows up. That's what I do with Photoshop. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 00:12, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I won't be able to re-upload this until I get back next week. Did we decide on how long TW was being extended? 13:16, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think it was said till the end of the month, not sure. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:23, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

There is a LOT of waste by the way, all the way around his cahrart, color the background, to see it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:25, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I use the layers too, that way you can easily see and erase the waste. There's some on the back. 17:19, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs asked me to fix a white background. Re-uploaded. There shouldn't be any waste now. =) 04:02, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gracias, hun. :) 04:03, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's been three days since anyone commented. Should this be archived? 21:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) Tweaked
The entire image needed tweaking. So I re-did the stripe, darkened the highlights, fixed up the ear pink, and played with the shading. I also added depth in the eye. Comments? 16:04, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on his leg needs blurred, also the bottom of his haunch. 17:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights, make the stripe thicker, and blur it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 17:36, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 18:50, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

It says his left ear is torn, so tear that. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:54, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Tore his left ear, blurred the haunch shading, toned down the highlights, and tweaked the stripe. Comments? (By the way, on August 14th, if this isn't approved, I won't be able to work on this or any other of my images, considering that I'll be gone. Anyone can take over) 18:04, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste near his ear and back. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Removed. 20:41, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading a bit or darken the highlights. And I can't really see the stripe through all the shading, so maybe darken that too? Also, blur the shading a tad. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 20:57, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Im pretty sure that you tore the right ear,. not the left.Bluestar11796 22:28, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark, if you make the stripe much darker, it'll be pure black. Make it more like his warrior image and I think it'll be good :3 23:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are the changes showing? If they are, there is still a pixel by his ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I lightened the shading. 13:51, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. :3 15:53, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing, but Frostheart, I can't anymore. It's blurred to maximum. 15:55, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The stripe blends into the shading, define it. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  22:34, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure you're supposed to tear the ear on HIS left, not our left. 18:00, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripe could be a little darker, like his warrior image. I might be mistaken, though, because his warrior image has a little lighter shading. 19:37, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripe and thicken it. 18:05, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sasha (KP) - Redone
Original artist was FirePelt, and I just redid it to match the rogue image. Changes aren't showing. 01:21, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make her muzzle and the tip of her tail blend into her pelt more 03:09, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  12:01, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join? Stoneclaw33

Thicken the shading, blur it, and define the ear-pink; maybe brighten it. Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:33, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head. Looking good, Moonleaf. 17:10, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

My laptop is needing a battery replacement, so I'll edit this when I get it back.  19:08, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and define the earpink. Also, blur the shading on the haunch. 16:18, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add one more stripe on her haunch because the stripes on her hind legs and flank go up almost to her tail base on her rogue charart. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 21:34, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redstar (L) ~ Tweaked (Redone)
Changes may not be showing. Shading needed fixed. Also, I felt he wasn't dark enough for a dark ginger, so I fixed that too. As with all ginger cats, he needed stripes as well. Original artist is Flamingomom3. 15:53, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little bit more. Good job. :3 18:30, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have to admit, I like this one. I'm getting better at this. 19:17, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. This is good! <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 19:52, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Re-uploaded. 20:10, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the face, other than that I really like this! Nice job! SpottedtalonMudears 20:13, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...you are looking at the right one, aren't you? Second one down on the upload page. I think the shading looks fine. 20:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights/Darken the shading. 16:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't use highlights....for the millionth time. Re-uploaded. 18:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the stripes are a bit too straight, and unatural looking. Maybe curve them a bit? Anyways, this looks awesome! ^^

Umm...how am I to do that without redoing the whole thing? I was really hoping it would be good like this... Ugh. I guess I don't have much of a choice, now do I? 04:20, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, there were a few stripes I felt looked cockeyed, so I fixed them. Also, the one haunch stripe is gone, cause it...was just weird. Sorry, Paleclaw...but... I'm not curving them, because it would just be a waste of time. I'd end up screwing the whole thing up. =/ 04:40, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok that's fine. I understand. ^^ And oh, I forgot to sign before. XD Maybe make the earpink stand out a bitmore. It blends into the pelt a lot. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 20:20, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Look better? 20:39, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfur (W) ~ Withdrawn
Shading tweak. Original artist is Honeyfur, I think. 16:01, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Cloudy, you can only have one charart for tweaking and you already have Redstar. This will be declined. Sorry. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:03, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I've had this one reserved for a while though. I added it while TW was still going! 16:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry! There aren't dates in the table. Sorry about that. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:06, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Haha. No worries. I just want to get these done. I've had 'em complete for, like, a week and a half now. 16:08, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur this more? SpottedtalonMudears 20:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Where's the light source? It seems like the shading and highlights are everywhere... 16:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know where the light source is, honestly. This is still the original image... I'm just tweaking it. 18:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did it. I couldn't work with what was there. Every time I would try and fix the shading, it just made it worse. 18:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing so I can keep Mousefur's alt warrior up. 00:00, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Shredtail (W) ~Tweaked
ughhh... I really hate this one. He was mentioned as ragged, so I gave him ragged fur. He also needed scars cris-crossing his pelt, but I'm not quite sure how to do that without making him look like a tick-tack-tow board. xP Original artist was Night Shine. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:38, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

The ragged parts look good, but the scars don't look realistic. Maybe try using less scars, and make them longer so that they criss cross. Also try adding a scar or two to the head and tail. 16:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Vicky said she imagined him with a speghetti-like tail, so maybe make part of his tail bare. After all, he IS called Shredtail. 18:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy, when you say "spaghetti-like tail" do you think the erins mean like Running Horse's elder tail >? Or do you think that I should just trace over the short haired warrior lineart tail? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:33, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Scarletwind..... I know it's not your problem, but can you somehow lighten up the shading a bit? It's really hard for me to see the image. You don't have to if you don't want to, though. Just asking. 22:04, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it's actually quite easy to make a short tail, just make it look like shaggy fur at the end with rips, then if you really wanted to you could trace it, it doesn't really matter since the shorthaired tail is kinda thin anyway 23:20, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I've always pictured "spagetti-like' to almost be like..shredded in a way. Like some claws tore and shredded it apart.

Kind of like that, in a way. It's just an idea though :). Also, on the tail, there should be some scars too, if it's shredded. Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  15:34, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I just made it worse. I tried to make the "spagehtti-like tail" a like rock's tail. Having the fur torn and pulled out so the fleshy tone of his tail was seen, but I think I made it worse. @Elorisa, I like that idea, is it alright if I use it if this doesn't work out? Changes aren't showing up yet... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Scarletwind, that is almost exactly how I pictured it! I think you should keep it that way, it's really good. 15:39, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

@Scarletwind; Yes :). Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  15:49, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but maybe put the scars UNDER the shading? It kinda throws me off whenever people make scars above it, but that's just me. XD Other than that I don't really see anything wrong. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 20:18, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Paleclaw. Haha, I totally forgot about that... added shading to the scars. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:25, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

This. Is. Epic! Blur the bottom scar on the tail just a tad though, if you don't mind. =) 21:28, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:17, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

The top of the tail lineart looks a bit awkward. It's uneven in places, can you make it all the same thickness? If you don't see where I mean, I can circle it for you~. Looks wonderful otherwise, Scarlet :D Vega;  Beauty is absoulute.  02:09, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't think the changes are showing yet. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 02:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (A) ~ Redone


Since we're now allowed to do one regular image and one tweaked image, I decided to do Squirrelflight. Original artist was Bluestar1776, and I redid her to match her warrior image. Comments? 21:10, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing, Mistystar! Could you blur where the white meets the orange a tad though? 21:26, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! '''Re-Uploaded. ''' 21:34, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail a tad bit 23:39, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Icewhisker (MC)~ Redone
It needed to be long haired. Comments? 23:35, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and make the tail highlight a bit bigger. Nice job! 23:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Troutstream (W) - Redone
I decided to redo Troutstream (she needed to be long-haired), who I was the original artist of. And gosh, her stripes on the old image were sloppy. xD Comments? 23:43, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

They looked good! And so does this. Darken the shading or brighten the highlights. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:04, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (L) - Redone
I borrowed all the colors from the original image, which was made by Minnowclaw, and it needed to be long haired. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! To me, the nose looks a little bright 23:44, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:01, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Her description says she's sleek... <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Fear the pink <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3"> mist! 01:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)