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Swallowtail (RC) (E) - Redone
I have permision now, don't worry :). Original artist was Bramble, shading needed tweaking and stripes needed to match the warriors :D . Comments?  Elorisa   19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the smudges :3 20:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I personally like the smudges. The make him look furry, which is brilliant to me. I think you should just enlarge the ear-pink a bit. 20:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like the smudges too, Shellheart. They're just a little sharp. 21:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say leave 'em as they are. They look good to me :3 23:55 Sun Oct 23

Reuploaded~better?  Elorisa   02:02, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the reddish parts on her haunch and her leg? 17:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the ear-pink curve round more at the top. 08:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I didn't see any reddish parts...:/  Elorisa   20:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights looks blotchy. 22:52, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I redid it..again xD. The shading was wonky and icky, so I fixed it *throws confetti* comments? :3.  Elorisa   15:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a little green to me... Maybe darken her a little? 15:51, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink and blur the shading a tad -Guradian 01:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Scourge (ki) - Tweaked
NOW I UNDERSTAND. Yes..sorry.. I dont know that.... then I putting it agin... sorry agin!!!! I really dont know Im allowen to have only 2 charart each.Leaf-storm,19:32,October 24,2011 (UTC)

Make the blurring on his white paw less blotchy, and please try and make an effort with spelling. In addition, try to avoid capitals and excessive exclamation marks. 21:40, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the left earpink, and write the OA and why it was tweaked. 22:53, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mosswisker&Stealthfire is OA and reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:48,October 25,2011 (UTC)

And I tweaked it becuase he have the white paw on the wrong side Leaf-storm,16:50,October 25,2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 22:54, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,12:01,October 29,2011 (UTC)

There is a lot of blurred lineart it seem. :3 Please fix it, by smudging the colors to cover up the blurred lineart, or something of that sort. ;) 20:03, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Its not blurred I checked it now Leaf-storm,11:51,October 30,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white paw. 02:49 Mon Oct 31

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur her spots more. 20:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:58, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh how I love xcf. files >:3 22:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little too dark, or too yellow. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 00:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I took all the colors from her leader image.... 00:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure you took them from the right spots of the image though. The spots look a little green... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail needs highlights. 22:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are not mandatory. 04:00, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think what you meant to say, Dapplecloud, was that the tail needs an area where there isn't any shading. Am I correct? 06:13 Fri Oct 28

Reuploaded Eh... -- 20:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful. Make the earpink slightly more pink. 01:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her front legs. 12:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 14:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image needs to be lightened to match her other images. And I know highlights aren't mandatory USUALLY, but the other images all have highlights. Should this on have them too so they match? Unless you can match the 'shiny' look without highlights. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

And also move the three stripes up a bit to match the other images. 17:40, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Applefur (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Believe it or not this is actually a tweak, since I did everything over the original image. Anyway, OA was Sandstar and the mottles needed to be redone. 10:15, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

It's so pretty~:3. Smudge the dapples a tad to give them a slight furry-esque look, like the warror image~  Elorisa   20:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and the mottles. 23:24, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 09:41, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on his face just a bit? He seems a little dark. 01:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:21, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some smaller mottles so it resembles the warrior image more. 01:08 Sun Oct 30

Re-uploaded 09:21, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) ~ Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this. It needed to be more ginger colored and the shading needed to be smoothed out more, so that's what I did. I tried to match the previous pattern of stripes the best I could because I thought it looked nice. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Moonleaf to add stripes, I believe. Comments? 18:07, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Clear up the waste around him and redden the earpink a little. :3 19:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I kinda wanted to do this one, but oh well :). Darken the tail shading. 19:58, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading thinner, lighten and define it. 20:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I like this! darken the shading on the tail Guradian22:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Unless the changes aren't showing, I still see tons of waste. Moreso around his head and back. 22:37, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'll get on that as soon as I'm back to my computer tomorrow night. 23:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes. 01:08 Sun Oct 30

Re-uploaded. I decided he should be a bit more dramatic looking. 02:50, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I like it XD Define the stripes a bit more. 02:53 Mon Oct 31

Re-uploaded. They're as defined as they're going to get. 03:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Larksong (E) - Tweaked
The charat needed lighter shading and OA was Echomist. 23:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the haunch shading? 20:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think the lineart on her forehead it lightened. Please fix that ^^ --Guradian109822:38, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the haunch highlight or darken the other two. 23:46, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

This is really nice Dapple! Blur the tail-tip a bit please. 18:16, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:38, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki)- Tweaked
Ugh. That's all I'll say, except the OA is Shimmerpool and I think tweaked or summin by Iceheart. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 08:05, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a whole lot; I can barely see it. 19:14, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face. 12:37, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is only tweaked for the stripes, Specklestream. If so, blur/smudge the stripes on the tail -Guradian1098 00:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Q) - Tweaked
Orginal artist was Hawkfire, shading and highlights needed tweaking. Comments? Elorisa  19:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The muzzle looks white because of the highlight, could you please fix that. And it looks like there's blurred lineart now. It wasn't listed for that I know, but I don't remember it being there before you tweaked it, so I think you should fix it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really odd and blotchy to me... I don't know. 15:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''tried blurring and tweaking the shading... :/  Elorisa   15:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred a lot. Try what you can, and if you have to, maybe you can redo it. 18:00, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks blurred still, and the muzzle still looks white. 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:39, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Flowerstar - Tweaked
OA=Dawnfeather & i burned in the stripes. Soooo comments? 22:29, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the tail a bit? This looks cool! 22:35, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the 'M' on her forhead as well. Nice job --Guradian109822:37, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:42, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the patches more ginger? They look brown to me. 22:43, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose pink match the ear-pink. 12:36, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This = amazing! Blur the right side of her cheek, beside the eye. 18:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Guys. This is being tweaked for the stripes, and JUST the stripes. don't comment on anything else. The stripes on the tail, though they look cool, look kinda like dotted lines? Could you make them look more.... connected? The is beautiful! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:20, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnstripe(W) - tweaked
Made her a shorthair, OA=Darkhallows 23:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good Bloo! Brighten the dots. Or is it stripes? I can't see x3 18:05, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Im not doing anything to it. Just making it a shorthair here - 23:02, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you at least darken the shading on the back? 03:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

This was actually listed for redoing. It was your choice whether you wanted to layer over the lineart or not, but since it was listed for redoing, you're able to tweak other things too. I guess it's your choice, but it IS in the rules. And I agree with cloudy, the shading needs to be darkened. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:15, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (W)~ Redone
OA was Nightshine and it needed to be brown and nobody likes triangle tabbies so heres this. 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot more, especially around the highlights (if you use them, of course) Guradian1098 01:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks pinkish-cream, not brown. 02:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

At least tint the base color to be more brown. 03:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ear farest from us. and her base coat looks gray, make the base coat match her elder. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't need to change it to match Oblivion's; she posted first, so Oblivion's should match hers. Lighten the shading a tad. 00:59 Sun Oct 30

As I suggested below, she should talk it over with Oblivion, and see what should be done. It shouldn't just be "Oh, she posted first" sort of thing. It's not fair to either artist. 23:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I've left Iceheart a message on her talk page. Now it's just a matter of waiting until she replies :3 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E) - Tweak
Shading needed to be blurred, and OA was Sandstar I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:07, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the back please, and blur the earpink a little bit. 17:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Shading's fine. Just blur the ear pink, please - 18:38, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:18, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Er... I don't know how to say this, but could we add this to the redo list for its colouring? It really looks more dark-yellow than brown. 01:01 Sun Oct 30

Its close enough. Blur the earpink a tad more. Lovely image Guradian1098 01:08, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Since he's "mangy", maybe you could add some patches of skin/tufts of fur on him? 21:19, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

You missed a pixel in his eye; colour it in so it's not white XD 02:54 Mon Oct 31

No I didn't Wildy, that's just one of the shades in there. I use a really light, and a really dark shade to add depth to my eyes. And I just noticed that 'mangy' part of his description. I can't decide which to do though, missing patches, or messy patches? What do you guys think? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:05, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say missing patches. I honestly can't see any colour: I even zoomed in on GIMP. Maybe the changes aren't showing? I dunno. 03:09 Mon Oct 31

I'd say do both, just to be safe :3 I've seen a mangy dog, and it had both, so... 03:10, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Which pixel are you talking about Wildheart, because the one I THINK you're looking at, clearly has color for me when I zoomed in in gimp. I copied this version of the file just to be safe, and it does. And alright, I'll get working on the fur now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:15, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ewwwwww, I really hate how this turned out. DX ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:29, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, no, it looks great! There's just the one patch on the top of his lower back where there shouldn't be skin sticking out off of his body, you know? 03:32, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Same on the head. Otherwise, beautiful :3 03:54 Mon Oct 31

Mothwing (W) - Redone
The next one on her lineup. Redone to match the MC. Comments? 00:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the artist before you? And maybe add some more stripes so it matches the medicine cat image .Blur the ear pink, too Guradian1098 01:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I don't know and tbh I don't care. I can't add anymore stripes because I don't know where to put them, but I will blur the ear pink. 01:17, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It took me a few seconds to look up the OA of this image. 02:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, I'm not you, and for your information, this project is concerned for the welfare of images and not for OAs. 02:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Icestorm, it's not that big of a deal and I thought we were supposed to say the OA anyway? Lighten the shading on her flank a tad. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Does it really matter who the OA is? Sometimes, it's hard to tell, 'cause most of these were moved from other file names. 02:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have shading on the flank. Do you mean the midriff? 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Flank = the area where your kidneys are. Judging by its location in a human, as well as Brackenfur's scar, I'd say it's where the shading is too dark. 02:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ohfail. I was thinking the My Little Pony flanks...where they have their cutie marks...yeahsorry XD 02:54, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink a bit. 19:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there's some smudged lineart on the tail; fix that. 06:09 Sun Oct 30

Re-Uploaded: Lightened shading on flank, blurred back shading, blurred earpink. Where is the smudged lineart? The lineart is perfectly fine. 14:29, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there waste all around the image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not. There is waste all around it. 16:49, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (Ki) - Redone
Next one. Redone to match MC. Comments? 00:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur teh stripes a little bit more to match your other image. So pretty :) 03:34, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you :) I tried to blur at Gaussian Blur 2.0, but it blurred all into the pelt. 19:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

OMG! I'm visting! And, very pretty, add some stripes to her forehead. And an you give me credit for tweaking it? And who was the OC? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to match the MC, so why would she add stripes to the head? 19:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

'Cause on the MC image, it looks like she has a stripe or something on her forehead/head. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She oes have a stripe. And it was tweaked by you xD 23:32, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

All I see are three little dots. Define the "stripe", if it's there. 00:21, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I couldn't define it, so I just re-did it. 14:30, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (E) - Redone
Eh, not too sure about this one... Should I change the stripes to match her warrior? I'm terrible at that tabby style, though ;_; 11:40, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I really love these stripes you did, though... Anyway, define the earpink a lot. 14:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This style of ear-pink looks good only on the leader charart, made it different. Leaf-storm,15:57,October 29,2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. 16:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like this style of ear pink. Less hassle. xD Blur the shading. 17:58, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like it too :P Blur the shading on the hindquarters, I love this image by the way! 18:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.' 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you change this so that it matches Iceheart's image? She was the first to post it, so it should match hers. <span style="">00:54 Sun Oct 30

I'm fine with changing the stripes, but I'm hesitant to change the colour. Personally - with absolutely no offence at all to Iceheart - I think the shade of brown in this image is more suitable. People have even been asking Iceheart to change her colour to make it more brown. I'm open to suggestions, though. 02:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, both images' color need to be changed. Iceheart's needs to be more brown, and I think this needs to be a little less pink/red. could you fix that? And honestly, though Icy's image is gorgeous, I like these stripes better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:13, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

No offense to Iceheart, but I like this style of stripes better. I think both of you should talk it out and see which one you like better. 17:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsetail (P3) (Q) - Tweaked
Now I know this wasn't on the tweak list (I could add it now if you want), but it needed to be tweaked. Original artist was Sandy, and the shading needed to be darkened and the patches needed to be tweaked, as far as I can see. 15:25, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! Make the ear-pink a bit pinker. 17:18, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:32, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Quince (KP) ~ Tweaked
OA was Moonflight, then I tweaked it. Now, I'm tweaking it again. Shading needed to be blurred, so I ended up redoing the shading. 17:49, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Good job, I honestly don't see anything wrong with this besides maybe the color should have noticeable shading. 19:24, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I lightened the base pelt color and made the shading darker. Better? 23:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh shoot my bad, I meant collar! Derp. Bad on my part. Either way, it looks good anyway. xD 01:02, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Q) - Redone
OA was me. Redid the stripes to match Silverstream's. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:31, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

It was only her facial markings that were said to match Silverstream's, wasn't it? 00:56, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe, but the warrior's been tweaked already. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 01:07, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (W) ~ Redone
I am a warrior now! OA was Sandstar12, and needed to be short haired. First redone image. Comments? 00:57, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the legs. 00:58, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the earpink. Welcome to the dark side. :P <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:59, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, welcome Stoneclaw, and very good job! Define the tail shading. 01:01, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. My earpink sucks... 01:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Am I looking at the wrong version, or is the eye not colored it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I can see the eye colours... Blur the shading a tad. <span style="">01:14 Mon Oct 31

Reuploaded. Changes are not showing. 01:33, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. 01:34, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Swoop (KM) - Tweaked
Kay, believe it or not, this IS actually tweaked. XD Originally I redid the mud, then I blurred and thickened the shading while I was at it, then I found out she needed stripes, so I burned those in, THEN I realized she's supposed to be DARK ginger so then I messed with the hue/saturation. XD So yes, this IS tweaked. Don't comment on that. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:04, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I don't doubt it, Paleclaw. You be amazin' :3 Blur the earpink a tad and it'll be puuuurrrrfect ;D <span style="">01:06 Mon Oct 31

Reuploaded - Done. And thanks Wildy! ^^ Oh, I forgot to add this in the first post. This isn't redone, but since it pretty much looks it, do I have to do the CG image too? Or no? Oh, and I also forgot to add the OA. Originally by Nightfall I believe. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

You probably should. I dunno for sure, though. Ask Iceheart - she was the OA of the CG image. <span style="">01:12 Mon Oct 31

I don't see why you'd have to if it was tweaked, that means it should be able to be tweaked by anybody as well  01:13, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Rainfur (W) - Tweaked
OA was Hiddensun. Needed actual flecks. Comments for improvement? 01:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - Tweaked
OA was Sunspirit and was possibly tweaked by Bramble. Needed a scar. Don't be afraid to comment on something that it wasn't nominated for, 'cause I'll fix it. Comments? <span style="">06:14 Mon Oct 31

I think the scar would be a bit thicker, considering what made it. 06:47, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

...what made it? <span style="">07:32 Mon Oct 31