Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Whitewing (Q)- For Approval
--My first charart. I did the best I could. Comments =) Darkmoon25'

She is completely white. Don't worry, when I started making charart, I would be that with white cats too. You need to make it a light gray, because if it's totally white, then shading won't work. Do you know how to shade? Because if not I could teach you.-- ♥Halloweenclaw 13:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

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There's a few blurry sections of Lineart, and the shading should probably be thickened a bit. I can't see anything. XD (But that might be just me) The ear pink should be blurred out, and in a triangle shape. But don't worry, it's pretty good for your first charart! :) Just a suggestion; If you already know this, i'm very, very sorry. But you should go to http://pixlr.com/editor and use that. Using that program you can use the blur tool to blur shading and ear pink (Be careful not to go over lineart, and if you do, just open up paint and go over the black lines with the pencil tool) and you can use the 'Burn' tool to darken parts, etc. Once again, I'm very sorry if you already knew about pixlr. =)  Shistar BOO! 15:16, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Shigura covered it all.-- *Minn owc law*  15:17, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the one cheek and behind the ear, it is lighter than the other spots. --Mosspath  of Skyclan 15:29, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

For shading, use the burn tool. (if you already know this, ignore me), and run it over the back, hind leg, and other places that have shading. --Rainwhisker 09 19:25, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

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Okay, the lines that were blurred are a bit too thick now. And there still isn't any shading. XD (I checked. XP) There should be a few white pixels in the eye, (Look at Ferncloud's eye to see how it should look) And the ear pink should still be more triangular and blurred along the outside. =)  Shistar Mai Talk Page! =) 17:22, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

There are only still some white parts near her face and her ear.-- *Minn owc law*  23:13, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

(S) - Maybe it's me, but the eye looks turquoise. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:29, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

hmm... my main problem is that you've now made her so far off-white that she looks pale grey... =/ Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:40, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Make the shading darker also, and blur the ear pink slightly as it looks like it is now painted on. (ps. please sign with ~ so we can see the timestamp, thanks) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:35, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, pretty much what Sandy said. Also, to make her less pale gray, use the dodge tool at about size 70, and the brush that gets lighter out. (Please disregard if you knew this.)-- Mossy SC  22:33, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

re uploaded. I lightened her and darkened the shading. also changed eye color. finally i Blurred the ear pink. please approve this! Darkmoon25

I don't know, she still looks pale gray to me--Nightfall101 23:40, November 10, 2009 (UTC) I dont see anywhere she is pale grey. Except for the shading.Darkmoon25

(S) - I can tell you changed the eye, but maybe make it a darker green, like on her warrior image. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:18, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

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I have a few things and although I don't often do them, I've drawn you a diagram (yay!) to help show you what I mean.

Okay: the red circle shows where I don't think you need the shading as it wouldn't go around the whole lineart of the tail. The purple shows where you need to add shading, the blue shows where the lieart is blurred. You also need to blur all the shading into the pelt as it's quite messy. The background needs to be made transparent and the ear pink is too bright (I put a patch of the colour I would recommend next to the ear although there are other colours that can be used on white cats and look good) Hope this helps =) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:16, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25

Darken the belly shading more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:46, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 Darkened the belly shading

Almost there. Just blend the shading and make the ear pink more triangular and she'll be ready, I think. [Note: you don't have to upload under a new file name each time, just choose a name that's something like: Whitewing.queen.png or Whitewing(Q).png or Whitewing_Q.png and reupload over the old one each time instead of having whitewingqueen2, whitewingqueen3 etc. These extra files just clog up the wiki] Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:43, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Ok i will get to that. But I tried to upload files on the old image but my changes are not being shown. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

Sometimes it takes a few minutes to change. I find that often mine don't change for a couple of days: I'm not quite sure why but it may be something to do with temporary files stored on your computer, or it may just be the wiki being slow. The best person to ask would be Eu. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:16, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 It showed my changees! Anyways I blended the shading and change the ear pink shape. Is it ready?!=)

(M) - Almost. There's a bit of blurred lineart on the tail, and the shading on the belly looks darker than the rest. Also, the ear pink is too bright and needs blurred more. Fix those things and then she should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:52, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I dont see any blurred lineart but i will work on the other stuff later tonight.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

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Just think the shading on the belly a bit and blur it, and she'll be ready. :) Nice job. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:27, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 blurred belly shading.

I think it needs to be blurred a tad more.-- Darkhallows 11:08, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 This has gotta be ready now.

Make the ear pink a little bit thicker at the bottom of the ear pink so that it's similar to the lineart of the ear pink. Also, this may just be my laptop, but I think this still looks like a light gray. Run the dodge tool over it once or twice (making sure the eye color stays the same and doesn't get lighter) and it should be good. --  Icy -chan  01:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

OK i will try to thicken the ear pink. and on my computer it does not look gray. Why does everybody have to find problems with my art just when it was gonna get approved? any way how do u like my Christmas siggie?<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

It does look a little grey to me too. People find problems with your art because they're trying to help you improve it for the benefit of the wiki; it's not a personal thing. (Also, nowhere here can I see that it was about to be approved) And yes, your siggie is cool. I need a christmas one, I'm feeling left out ^_^ Sandy   Talk   16:44, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Run the dodge tool over it, maybe, and then fix the eyes. That might make it look whiter.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:22, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Lightningpelt- For approval
A minor character. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 00:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

The white streak on her back would probably be on the lineart, rather than on the side of the pelt like it is now. Otherwise, great job, Hawkfire! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:26, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Icethroat, and also make the ear pink more of a fine triangular shape, and less of a bright pink color. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦ <font color="Purple">Contribs 01:49, November 9, 2009 (UTC) Awesome! Um I don't really see anything *goes closer* Nope &#91;&#91;User:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;background:silver; color:goldenrod;&quot;&gt;&#39;&#39;&#39;Icestorm&#39;&#39;&#39;&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;sup&gt;&#91;&#91;User Talk:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;color:blue;&quot;&gt;How&#39;s the prey running?&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;/sup&gt; 02:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Make sure you make it slightly smaller, as we probably wouldn't be able to see it all. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:04, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the streak on the back, and worked on her stripes and ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 19:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

nice work. but now I can hardley see the streak. maybe make it a bit bigger and longer. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

Your tabby stripes seem to be blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:56, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 23:11, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok the image still looks good. but I can hardly see the ear pink and the streak looks more like a patch now then a streak. But good job <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

This hasn't been updated in awhile. Please update soon.-- Darkhallows 11:04, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 19:36, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart around the neck area, and the lineart on the back is a bit too thin. Also, the ear pink is touching the bottom of the ear when it should be a fine triangular shape, kept inside the ear lineart. Fix these things, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a week; please work on it or it will be declined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry about that! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 21:46, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Snowfur (Q): For approval
Well she died as a queen so here ya go.



Alot of the credit goes to Icethroat, for helping me out with the shading. Comments? --Bluestar1776 22:23, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Some of the lineart on her ears are blurred a lot, and I can barely see any color on her nose. Also, there definately has to be some shading, and I would maybe blur the gray on the ear that's farthest from us (her left ear), it looks like a circle--Nightfall101 22:27, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - sharpened ears, darkened nose. --Bluestar1776 23:17, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add color to the nose, make the lineart on her hindleg and her front leg that is closest to us black, and lighten the eyes. Also add shading. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:38, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened lineart, colored nose. --Bluestar1776 16:03, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Drumroll, please!! *drumroll drumroll drumroll* Thanks, Echo, for showing me how to do the shading! --Bluestar1776 19:21, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I an kind of see that there is shading but you need to darken it slightly. Use the burn tool and rn it over a few times. Then use the blur tool to blend the shding in. Also, the ear pink needs to be more triangular Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:15, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened shading, fixed ear pink. Lol, is it blurry enough for you? Hahaha I'm just kidding it sucks. --Bluestar1776 17:12, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I put up two versions. The second one is a thousand times better, in my opinion. --Bluestar1776 17:29, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

I still can't really see the shading on either version and you've now blurred the lineart... more noticeably on version1. Use the burn tool to darken the shading and then fix the blurred lineart. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:03, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart, mostly on the forepaws and belly. And you don't need to put the image at the end of the section, because the changes appear above. And don't forget to leave your sig so we know who you are. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:10, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Don't know if it's just my computer, but it looks like her shading turned into spots on top of her spine. don't know if it just me or not. --Honeyrose34 23:35, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

You're right about the shading Honeyrose. Try and brush it up a little, make it straighter and more even. --Nightfall101 03:15, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - fixed the shading. --Bluestar1776 19:11, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Looking good. But I would lighten the shading on her belly and chest, it looks like it's gray there instead of just shaded--Nightfall101 21:59, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - should I lighten it any more? --Bluestar1776 22:11, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's coming along great! Try and even it out on back though, it still looks a little bumpy--Nightfall101 22:14, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - lightened the shading on the back. --Bluestar1776 22:19, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I have to eat dinner, will work on it more after. --Bluestar1776 22:21, November 17, 2009 (UTC)



The red is where the lineart is blurred, and the blue is where the shading needs to be darkened--Nightfall101 22:58, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I fixed the areas you said to. Better? --Bluestar1776 00:22, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It's getting a lot better! But, all the shading still needs to be both thickened and darkened--Nightfall101 00:27, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened the shading on the back. --Bluestar1776 00:51, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, but it's still hard to see. Thicken the shading on the back and tail, and try straightening it--Nightfall101 00:54, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I don't know what you mean by "thicken", but I did my best. --Bluestar1776 02:09, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Is the gray on the ear tip shading? It looks very sudden. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 14:48, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

It's not shading, Snowfur is supposed to have gray tipped ears. But the shading really needs some work, it looks bumpy and uneven--Nightfall101 21:15, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 23:33, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

The shading isn't as bumpy anymore, but it still needs to be evened out--Nightfall101 22:21, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you should get rid of the images that aren't being improved. I'm not really sure which one I should look at.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:20, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 14:51, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, the shading looks much better. But there is a spot at the base of the tail that's to dark, lighten it up a little. Also, you seem to have forgotten to put pupils in her eyes --Nightfall101 22:33, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I lightened that, and she does have pupils. --Bluestar1776 00:23, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

She's almost there. Just blur the shading a tad more (be careful not to hit the lineart) and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:31, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. Anything else? --Bluestar1776 19:47, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

I hate to keep commenting about this, but I can hardly see the shading anymore--Nightfall101 00:23, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well Nightfall, I think that may be your imagination. I know because one time you told me to fix the shading. I didn't do ANYTHING and posted "reuploaded" and you said it was much better. I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Bluestar, this isn't about catching other users out, it's about getting good quality images for the articles. This project is a team. Teams trust each other and if you said you'd reuploaded then it is assumed you've actually made the changes... I can't see the shading much either so you need to make it darker. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:01, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well it's just that every time I change it it's to dark, then I change it again and it's too light. Then I don't change it all and it's PERFECT. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Reuploaded - Too dark now? -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

(S) - Could you blur the shading a bit more? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:50, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

It should be blurred more, I think.-- Darkhallows 11:09, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred it, but you can't really see it... -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

The ear pink colour is too bright. Make it like the colour in  Sandy <span style="font-family:Freestyle Script;color:Goldenrod;"> Talk   20:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - fixed ear pink, is it too big? -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

The ear pink looks fine. Thicken the shading on the back some more, make the eyes look more like the eyes on Willowpelt's queen image, Lilyfur, or Splashheart, and part of the lineart on the belly looks blurred. Otherwise, great job! -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:52, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 01:07, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, I'm ashamed of myself. I said Splashheart instead of Splashnose. Splashheart is a tom... Anyway, thicken the shading on the back some more, add some shading to the hind leg (or haunch, I honestly don't know which it is), and add different shades of color to the eye, like demonstrated here. This looks a lot better, though. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:20, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *sigh* I tried to do what you said, but it still looks terrible. Maybe charart just isn't my thing... I mean, I've been a member for longer than Nightfall, and Nightfall's already a warrior and I haven't had one image approved. My chararts just don't look as good as everybody elses... they don't look half as good as any of the approved images. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:44, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

No, this is much better! Don't worry, out of al solid colored cats to shade, I think that it's hardest to shade in white cats, so don't be discouraged at all. For the shading, here's an example of where to put the shading at:. The shading would probably be a bit lighter, but that's how thick and where to put it at. It also shows where the extra lineart was (because I got rid of the blurred lineart).

I hope this helps! -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:31, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you so much! I really had trouble with the shading. I was going to do Whitestorm as a deputy, since he died as one, but now I'm thinking no more white cats for a while. ;) -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:57, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) - For Approval
Technically he died as a deputy, so here ya go. What do you think?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He's GGOD!!just add more the shading, and blur the ear pink. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#ff1493">Talk 04:12, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He needs a little more shading, and possibly highlights. Right now he looks flat.(I shouldnt say that, because the computer screen is flat) Ok, he looks 2-D.-- Shad owed  heart  12:59, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes don't have a pupil/highlight. --Bluestar1776 15:57, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and the lineart on the hind leg that is furthest from us is blured. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:32, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading, blurred the ear pink, and fixed the hind leg. He already has a highlight in his eye. I sort of made a highlight at the top of his head, but I'm having a little trouble with them.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  16:19, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like you darkened the shading rather than thickened it. Can you thicken it some more?-- Ashshadow My Clan 21:55, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well I darkened and thickened it, but I'll thicken it some more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:53, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

You need to add a bit more color to the eye, and add a pupil/highlight. Here's an example: (Don't critcize, I just made this in like 2 minutes and didn't bother with shading.) Anyway, see how his eye has more color? Lol sorry meh image ended up a little higher than yours. --Bluestar1776 22:02, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Er, I can't see the image.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  06:22, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Try using this as a reference on how to do the eye: --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 16:34, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading and fixed the eye.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:05, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the eye looks goo, but the shading needs blending. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:34, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Ignore me if you want to, but the eyes look kind of red to me. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:54, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the midriff, and the eye does look reddish, make it look more like the color of Lionblaze or Cora's amber eye color. Also, the shading could be blurred some more, it still looks bumpy in some spots. Otherwise, great job! --  Icy -chan  03:27, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the eye more orange-ish, and blurred the shading as much as I could.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  22:51, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The midriff still needs shading. Look at Bluefur's deputy image, or Ratscar for shading on the midriff. --  Icy -chan  22:02, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Ah, yes, now I see what you mean by midriff.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:01, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The front leg's lineart is blurred, so maybe try to sharpen that by pressing Ctrl on the blur tool. The ear look kind of bright; what I would do is go from black and sideways slanted upwards on the color pallette until it seems right. The shading also seems darkly layers, so try switching the coloring to Shadows and blurring. And the highlight on the head looks kind of odd, as it's right next to the shading and looks mis-placed. Try placing it a little in front of the ear and down across from the eye.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:50, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Dovestar-For Approval
This is Dovestar. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:25, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Nice work! Just lighten the shading a little bit. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 14:32, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

better? hope it's not to light :/. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 15:45, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. Just darken the ear pink a little and he should be good to go. The ear pink is really bright. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 16:18, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:31, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is still a tad too bright and it's too big. --Honeyrose34 21:12, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * Better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Now the ear pink is purplish. Try making it a light salmon-ish color instead. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:40, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

I know things are busy with the holidays and stuff, but please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:00, December 4, 2009 (UTC

yes hmm...I'm not sure how to get that color..:/ help? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Just run a pinkish color over the ear pink and blur it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 19:00, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

mist where sunlight shimmers-for approval
well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it?? *santa pool*  07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --  Icy -chan  20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  pool*  07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.-- Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also Sandy   Talk   16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --  Icy -chan  21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better?? *Ivy pool*  06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look right, make it look like this. Also, maybe make the end of the tail a little bit darker than the rest of the tail (just use the burn tool a couple of times), so that it shows the shading more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *angel's  bells*  06:38, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks need to be a little lighter. Other than that, great job! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Hareflight- For Approval
Here's Hareflight. Her description looked easy so I took a go at it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:49, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job, Hawkey. Just blur the shading and highlights a bit so that they don't look so messy, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:31, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the color a little bit more natural, right now it looks dul--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:35, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened color, and blurred shading and ighlights to the best of my ability. THe upload log works again! :D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 23:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the tips of it's paws, the fur gets lighter. Fix that unless it's part of the description of him. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - Maybe add some shading around the belly/middle section? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:05, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Swiftstar (L)-For Approval
Is he okay? Warriors808 22:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't bad but you need to blur the shading and highlights. you might also want to add some shading to his left side.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:08, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Are you even online? Great for your first try! Just do what Ashy said and he'll be amazing! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:22, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Also, he needs ear pink --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The space right between his hind leg and his right fore-arm is white, it needs to be gray--Nightfall101 06:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his leg, it looks. . . smudged. And yes, add ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched for 7 days. Please work on it soon--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:08, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Night, Black hasn't been on because she was on vacation. She went to the cape. Anyways she's online right now so she'll upload it because she already had it done but it wasn't uploaded. Anyways Black, for the image maybe blur the earpink some more and the lineart on the leg looks....blurred. Fill that in black with the bucket tool and I think he'll be ready. Nice job for your first Charart. Oh and Night she works on these but she doesn't have time to upload them. She is always busy. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:32, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't know--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Gone on vacation or not, Icestorm, Nightfall was right to say something; if you're not going to be able to update the image for a while, either leave a message saying so, or withdraw the image but leave it reserved so you can put it up when you get back. Image-wise, make the nose color a light gray instead of a pinkish color, don't have the ear pink filling up the entire ear, just in the middle of the ear, and make the ear pink more like the color of Smoketalon or Graymist's ear.

Also, the shading still needs blurred a lot more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. She didn't know. She is only a newcomer. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blacktail called me and I told her what happened and she said she is re-doing this. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of... strange. Make it smaller, and less inward. Blur it a bit as well. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) - For Approval
My second charart. Comments? --  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is incredible! Just two things, first of all I think I can see a gray speck on his belly. And then (This might just be me being picky) but the face looks a little to dark. Maybe lighten up on the shading there?--Nightfall101 20:59, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Holly!!! I agree with Night that the face is kinda too dark. And maybe blur a little the shading and the pink in the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

i love it! although, i agree also, the face is a bit too dark and shade the ear. Otherwise, its fantastic! -- ♥Shine star♥  23:31, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks =). Better now?  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is looking good. But there are two spots where the shading doesn't connect with the lineart. Right on his butt, (yeah, I said it =]) And the bottom of his front right paw.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:07, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart looks as if it is blurred. Blur the fur, and lighten up a bit, especially on the paws. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Fallowtail (Q)-For Approval


My first one!! Hope I did okay...I didn't know what her eye color was, so I just put blue. I got rid Of Dovepaw, because Minnowclaw was going to do her, and she just didn't look good. Any comments? -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 21:53, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The color is good but I can tell that the lineart showed up with a black bg. When that happens to me I paste the image into a word document before pasting and saving it in paint. Why not try that, otherwise this is good for your first one.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:53, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I'll try that thanks!! I try it later cuz I have to get off... -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:05, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

As of my last check, I believe Minnowclaw is doing Dovepaw. Could you please resumbit this as another cat? It should be fairly easy; there are lots of gray cats. -- Tinsel claw  22:32, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

If you added gray flecks the cat could become Fernpaw, but we're not supposed to do other ranks for cats already with chararts, as Tinselclaw (or Bramble?) says. The lineart looks like it's been thinned, as in some areas there is no lineart at all. Try thickening it and see what happens. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 22:45, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

She looks pixely. Try redo-ing it and save it as a PNG image. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 02:12, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. -- :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! 21:55, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Thanx, Icy! I'll try! -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:00, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added Shading and Highlights on this one I think...I'm new at this and I don't have a mentor, so I quessed at what highlighting is...I think that Fallowtail looks mottled now..:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 23:12, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

She looks kinda pink to me. Maybe it's my computer.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:15, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay 1. Don't change the file name 2. Highlights you use the dodge tool at 5 or 7 (square not circle) And go over the chest,the front paw,the head,the muzzle, and the tip of her tail. Then change it to size 30 (faded circle) and put one on the hind leg and everywhere else just make sure their together. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:34, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again now I know how to shade and highlight. Thanx, Icy, buddy!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:15, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again and again Comment please...-- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

You use the burn tool to shade. Once you got that blur the shading and highlights into the pelt. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:41, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is blurred, and you forgot to color in one of the toes. Fix that, as well as what Icestorm said, and make the eye look more like Lilyfur, Splashnose, or how it's done here. -- Silversnow  Icethroat says Happy Holidays!  01:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

They eyes need a highlight, or a little white dot. Like Icethroat said, you can see an example of the eyes on the turtorial page. Darken the ear pink to a more salmony color (not purply) and darken the shading. There's some blurred lineart on the chest, forepaws and head. Also, I saw you did highlights instead of shading. The shading needs to look like a a shadow on the cat, so the shading will be darker than the pelt color. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:02, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Nightwing (W)-For Approval
My second Charart! Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job!!! Maybe blur the ear more and either make the shading darker or the pelt lighter. Hidden -jimgle ♪  00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

It's AWESOME Icy, but blur the ear pink a little and maybe a couple shades lighter. Otherwise, It lookes great!!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:07, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be a bit smaller. It takes up the whole ear. Great job, my apprentice! :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:11, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Um I am trying to full it up to a lighter black but it fills the line-art to! Help! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:14, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still think the earpink is still too big. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

If you use pixlr.com you can either use burn tool to make darker or doge too to make lighter parts. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:06, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

And to blur the ear pink. It's too bright, run the burn tool over it a bit.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 20:16, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! But try making the ear pink more of a purplish-color. Like Fuzzypelt And maybe make it's postion a little higher--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Workin on it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:48, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is she ready for approval? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:08, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. I think she'll be ready after that-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred earpink. Better? Is she resady for approval? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:15, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Stop asking. It will be approved when it's ready. Add some shading on the top of the head and more on the chest. There is a dark patch on the haunch among the shading; get rid of that. also blur the shading as much as you possibly can. -- Tinsel claw  01:54, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I am sooooooooooooooooo sorry. And how do I get rid of it? (Please don't laugh) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 03:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Grr. Pixlr is getting on my nerves. Well I blurred the shading as much as I could. And I tried to get rid of the dark thing on her hind leg but it wouldn't leave! Help! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:56, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

How about erasing it and recoulouring it? Just a suggestion. Maplefern 00:09, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I don' know. I'll only do it if Warriors,Senior Warriors,Sandy or Bramble tells me to. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:36, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Ivypaw- For Approval
I don't know about this one...-- Darkhallows 11:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The gray patches seem smudged. Could you fix that please? -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Darken earpink.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:46, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I actually kind of like the way the patches are smudged; they look like fur instead of a patch of grey paint. But maybe smudge the ear pink, too and darken the shading?--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:52, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Nettlepaw (a) For approval


My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA) -- for Approval
It may not be nessacary, but I made an image of Hollyleaf as a medicine cat apprentice. It is my first and I'd like to learn as much as possible. Maplefern 13:50, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I'd say to blur the highlights around the edges, fill in that white spot on her belly, add ear pink, and to do the eye according to this tutorial. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 15:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Maplefern 15:47, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I can just see a few things: The Lineart on the chest seems to be blurred and the shadding isn't blurred enough (and needs to be lighter) ;). Something happened to the lineart on the hindleg too, I think. Otherwise it looks great for you first Charart =). --  Holly... leaf or berry?

Reuploaded Maplefern 16:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Your ear pink is round and more closer to the begining of her ear (tip). And make it a lighter color. It's too bright right now. Nice job for your 1st!! And by the way, on your title, you don't need to menton it's your 1st. Just say the cat, what position it's in, and that it's up for approval. I fixed it for u. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded Is it better? Maplefern 16:21, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, like her kit version. Add some shading to the tail, and make all of the shading just a little bit darker. But this image isn't really necessary right now, as it says up at the top in the purple box that says "important". Can you find any other cat this could be? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I can't. Can you? Maplefern 22:51, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maplefern 23:35, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

What could I improve on? --Maplefern 00:45, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and shading still need to be fixed as I said above. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:34, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Maplefern 11:41, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

I tried. Anything else? Maplefern 12:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Coloring is great and all, but last time I checked, Hollyleaf was a short-haired cat. What about that? WoodClan

That is true. The other blanks of Hollyleaf are short-haired, I believe. -- Tinsel claw  01:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, the other blanks are short-haired--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:27, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I'm working on it. Maplefern 11:14, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I had to do it twice because I forgot the ear pink the first time. Maplefern 11:28, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else that I could improve on? Maplefern 23:40, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Add a highlight on the bottom of the herbs (on the right of them, our right), and make the ear pink go down all the way to where the lineart of the ear ends, and don't have the ear pink filling up the entire space, and blur the ear pink a lot, and make it (the ear pink) the color of her kit version. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:34, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Just realized that. Thank you. Maplefern 11:31, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

One-eye (Q) For Approval
Yay! My first submision as a warrior! Okay, I did One-eye's queen picture because I've just always liked her, especialy when she was a warrior in BP. And the eye, I was trying to make it look cloudy but I don't think it came out quite right. Comments?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:47, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Make it like the warrior version; sort of a milky white. Put a pale pupil in as well. -- Tinsel claw  19:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with bramble.Make it more like a milkey white color,the fur is to much of a gray color, and I also agree to put a pale pupil,the eye sorta looks weird with out it.--Firepelt 19:52, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Reuploaded: Okay, I ran the dodge tool over it a lot, did it help? And how's the pupil? If it looks to precise I could blur it some--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:58, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry,but the pupil does need to be blurred,just a tad bit.the dodge tool did help though!--Firepelt 20:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Alright, I'll blur it. Right now I'm on a different computer and my One-eye image isn't saved on here. So I'll work on it later tonight=)--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:25, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait! Okay, I blurred the pupil, does it look better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:40, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...it still looks like an amber color, make it entirely like her warrior version, a pale white-ish color, and maybe a small gray pupil in the middle (where the blurred lineart is right now). Sorry if this doesn't help any. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:18, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:22, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

blurr the shading.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:42, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the shading as much as I could with pixlr--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:25, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice. Love how you did the eye. ;) I would darken the ear pink just a tad, though. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:40, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink. Better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:20, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

One-eye's "cloudy and sightless" eye is on the other side. Look at warrior and elder photos. Maplefern 21:39, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern, that is the correct eye. Look at her warrior image. The cloudy eye is her right eye in her warrior image. So, I made it the right eye on her queen picture. And she doesn't have an elder image yet, Spottedwing has it up for approval. I left a comment that she had the wrong eye--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:45, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Milkfur(D)-For approval
I know,the chest shading is messed up,I'll work on that.Suggestions?help?comments?critque?--Firepelt 22:28, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

can you take it out of the thumbnail so i can see it better? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

i would darken the ear pink a bit. -- ♥Shine star♥  22:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darken ear pink-Check --Firepelt 23:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

It's too small. You've made it in the size of the thumbnail version. You have to click on the image on the main page, then save it to your computer and edit it.-- Tinsel claw  23:40, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. i REUPLOADED IT,MADE THE FUR MORE OF A MILKY WHITE COLOR,FIXED THE EAR PINK.THE SHADING,AND THE LINE ART AND EYES.--Firepelt 23:38, December 7, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Is there going to be anymore comments?I have seen on a list of need charcat art that milkfur needed to be done as a depty.I need this one approved so if i gett 1 or 2 more,Ill be a warrior,--Firepelt 00:51, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Its only been a couple hours Firepelt anyway the shading looks a little messy.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:55, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be faded and the shading is blotchy and messy.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How's the shading now?I fixed it with the dodge tool,and added some where I had forgotten it.--Firepelt 02:00, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

He needs eye color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:14, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.--Firepelt 16:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Anything else?I tried to fix the shading.is it ok?--Firepelt 19:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

It's better but the shading on the body is a bit dark. Try making it the same color as the legs furthest from us and blur it some more.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:29, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart closer to his ear is blurred. Blur the shading more and add a pupil to the eye. (Get pencil tool brush 1 fill white pixlrs on the eye and leave 3 colored pixels. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:04, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading the best I could and I lightened the eye color,to dark of blue.I also I fixed the line art(sorry it was blurred!).Anything else?Firepelt 15:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

The shading still looks a little blotchy.Try blurring it some more-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:51, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

pixlr's blurring tool is like,horrible.I did the best I could with it,and it still looks alittle dark around the top of the front leg.Firepelt 22:31, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

One-eye (E) - For Approval
I don't really know which eye is 'clouded and sightless. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 03:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The cloudy eye is the one that we don't see (On this blank) So I'd color the eye amber. The shading could be blurred a little more, and I'd probably add some shading to the front paws too. And I can barely see the ear pink--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:27, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

how abought blurring the shading?? *Ivy jingle jingle!!*  07:17, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and darken the ear pink just a tiny, tiny bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:41, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think she is white, not grey. But if you intend to have a grey pelt, then it is good. Maplefern 00:28, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

No, One-eye is pale gray, not white--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Fritz (Lo) For approval
I hate this image... So, comments? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:54, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The black is too dark. Make it somewhat lighter so we can see the lineart. Put a highlight in the eye (a white pixel), and blur the ear pink and white patches. Make the far ear seem more torn than like it just vanished.

And please stop asking me what I think on my talk page. Post your art here, and I will comment here. -- Tinsel claw  22:15, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I will stop, but I did blur the spots and ear pink, oh well, I will just blur it more, thanks! -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 22:53, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, Nightwhisker, do already have an image up? I thought you did. Oh well, maybe I'm imaging things. Besides that, the spots need blurred. They look like you cut them out of paper and glued them on there. I'm not trying to be rude, but that's just why you need to fix them, that's all. --Honeyrose34 23:30, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is far too big and bright. Burn and fade it once you make it smaller.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:11, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the green in his eye. I can't see the eye. Maplefern 11:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC) Reuploaded OK, I fixed the image, so, any more comments? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:12, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded OK, I fixed the image, so, any more comments? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and smudge it. he only thing is that the whole body's pitch black and doesn't look right. I have no idea how your going to fix that now. -.-'--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:55, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is actually a very dark grey. I can see the lineart. Maplefern 11:34, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

This is in the thumbnail size, not the regular size. But I don't know how to change it without redoing the whole image. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 13:47, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Cloversplash (W)- For Approval
Comments?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:14, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front paw. And I see a red-ish color on the midriff. Fix that and I think she'll be ready. :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:30, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the fornt paw (the one closest to us) needs to be blurred. That's all I see. Nice job!! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Nice job Jingle(or do I call you mouse?)!!But could you add the pink to the ear?

oops forgot to sing. Hidden -jimgle ♪  00:17, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I cannot believe I forgot the ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon <span style="background:tomato; color:lime;"> Christmas is on the way!!!   01:07, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Meh, it's not the first time it's happened. :) Now, Cloversplash's description is a dark brown she-cat with a white splash on her nose, yes? It never says muzzle. So perhaps you could make part of her nose white. Yes, that does mean the lineart. -- Tinsel claw  22:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Beechfur(A)-For approval


I was reading a list that sandy sent me of need charcat art,and it said "More needed"It listed Beechfur-apprentice,so I decided to take on my 1st apprentice,and I need it to be approved.Comments?Critque?Suggestions?Help?--Firepelt 00:39, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Really GOOD Fire!!!! All I see is maybe make the shading thicker. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

oh and I think you forgot to color the belly...it's white. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:19, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Could you please try and make your file names not so long? Beechpaw(RC).png will do fine. It's entirely too long like this. The image is actually very good, though. Also, why did you delete Berrykit's section off the page? -- Tinsel claw  01:33, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Look between the front leg and the haunch. There is a small section of white there. -- Tinsel claw  01:52, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Oh,yeah,I forgot about that,I already had it.--Firepelt 01:58, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Anymore comments about the shading im ,wondering?--Firepelt 16:28, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Add a little more on the sides, and blur the transition as much as you possibly can. There is also still a white patch between the legs on the belly. And Fire, please just type the four tildes at the end of the message; don't type your user name. It's like me signing like this: Tinsel  claw  22:01, December 8, 2009 (UTC)Bramble So please just use the tildes and not your name. -- Tinsel claw  22:01, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

How's the shading now.I blurred the transition as much as I could,Also,Thank you to Icethroat for the awesom tutorials on the eyes and everythig else,you helped me!User:FirePelt|Firepelt]] 22:51, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Try lightening the shading some it looks kinda dark-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:48, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I lightned the shading.I found a good way to,If it's to dark,use the blur tool,then the smudge tool,then the blur again,it made it lighter!Firepelt 22:41, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Firepelt, could you reread the last post I made in this section? Thanks. Please, it's not that hard just to type four tildes after the end of each message, without anything else added. -- Tinsel claw  22:57, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I have read that section,I was editing this part and the tidles went away.I do type 4 tidles.--FirePelt

Thrushpelt (MC) For Approval
Man, Pixlr is really starting to get on my nerves. I'm gonna get either GIMP or Photoshop, all depending on what my parents say. Anyway, pixlr's blurring tool sucks, but I did my best. Here's Thrushpelt of WindClan, what do you think?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:59, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The image itself is awesome (try lightening the shading if it can't be blurred any more, so there isn't so much of a difference), but wouldn't Thrushpelt current image be a medicne cat blank? I know she was a warrior at one point, but in SotC, we mainly saw/heard of her as a medicine cat. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:07, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Crap!! How could I have possibly missed that?! Thank you Icethroat. Do you know how I could maybe, paste the coloring I did onto a medicine cat blank?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I tried, and tried, and tried, and *growls* I could use the clone stamp tool on Photoshop to copy it from the blank to the image, or vice versa, and I even tried to draw it in pixel by pixel, and maybe you can draw it in pixel by pixel, but my frustration after the stamp tool keeping hitting maybe an inch or so from where it was supposed to be, etc., left me with no pateince whatsoever. Sorry, but maybe you can draw the herbs in pixel by pixel, or you can probably ask Bramble to change it for you. (Sorry Bramble, I know you're busy, but I can't get that thing to work. I tried...I'm probably not using it right...)

Enough of my rambling on, even if you can't get the herbs for now, at least you can fix the shading while you wait. (Sorry...) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:55, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Well, I have a clone stamp on pixlr, maybe I could try it. Excactly how would I use it?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:00, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Well, I still haven't solved the blank problem, but I lightened the shading--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Here =) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas!  18:21, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you so much for doing that for me, Sand, but you were a little off in the lineart; it's not your fault! I know how to do it a better way without resizing and everything. Nightfall, I went ahead and reuploaded on your image so it has the herbs. -- Tinsel claw  21:54, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Color in the herbs and add highlights to them. Very good! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:10, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Yay! Bramble and Sandy fixed it for me! Alright, does it look okay?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:15, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yep, much better. But I see brown on the hind paw. (Next to the hind leg.) Does it say she has a brown paw? If so, keep it on. If not, get rid of it. Very cute image! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:20, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I just added that for fun. When I was on vacation last year, we saw two twin strays. They were black with ginger flecks. They were so cute! Any way, the tips of their paws looked like they had been dipped in ginger paint. I was just adding the brown tipped paw because of that--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:48, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Comments?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:47, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Chirp (Lo)-For Approval
Wow I haven't been on in a while! :) Here he is, Chirp! I just love that name...comments?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  11:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's pretty good. Maplefern 11:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a bit more pink in the ears -- Santastar Merry Catmas to all and all a good night! 12:12, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes really need blurred. --Bluestar1776 20:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did that help? P.S. This is my first Charart as a warrior! ^.^ -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:09, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good Mossy!! All I can see is maybe make the shading thicker, and what others osers said. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes just look to dark and "solid" to me... try running the dodge tool over them a bit, and blur them a bit more. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:43, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, thicken the shading (that's on the edge of the lineart, the shading inside the fur caused by the highlights is okay, but either brighten the highlights some more [only a little bit] or darken that other shading as well [only a little bit]), and blur the stripes a lot more. Glad you're back on. ;) These tabby stripes are awesome, by the way. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:37, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Furzepaw (A) - For Approval
The shading was hard on this one but on my cp it looks okay now. Constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:48, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful Sandy!! I see nothing wrong. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:59, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

What kind of name is Furzepaw? Anyway, this looks great. I see nothing wrong. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:29, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Furze is another name for gorse. I'm actually glad we don't have another gorse name; StarClan knows we have enough cats with gorse. So, now that I've put in my two cents on botany, shade the front legs a little bit, Sandy, and Furzepaw's good to go. -- Tinsel claw  02:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Foxheart(D)- For Approval
Look at it- it mocks me!!!! I know it needs work, just tell me what I need to do please!!!!-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:32, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Oooh, I like her! Just darken the ear pink a bit, but I don't see anything else. Way better than my attempt at her! Good job! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:07, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see much earpink, but other than that it is fine. Maplefern 22:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Great job! Just blur the shading. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:19, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Mossypaw (A) - For Approval
Hmm...not much to say for this one, except that I know the color near the lineart isn't the same as the fur on the top of the right front leg, I tried and tried and tried and for some reason it just wouldn't get the right color. :{ Anyway, comments and suggestions? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:29, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know, it looks awesome to me. Dunno what you're on about the front leg, it all looks great. :) Very nice rich brown color, btw. Only thing maybe is blur the shading on the white part of the body. That's all I see. -- Tinsel claw  02:39, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (CG) - For Approval

 * I sort of darkened the shading a bit too much, didn't I? I tried to do it by looking at the tutorials.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the shading does look a little dark and bumpy. Lighten and even it. Good job though! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:07, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:05, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

nice work Lighting :) there are some white puts of color on the tail lineart, and back lineart. otherwise I lile this. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:00, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! Just a few things 1)The space in between his legs and paws should be gray, not white (See Moss that grows by river, or Night of No Stars) The ear pink and nose pink look purple. Try making them more of a reddish color 3)I see two white pixels on the tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:06, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (W) Declined
I noticed Brambleclaw has no Warrior images, and I made one. Thanks For the Tutorial Icethroat! It really Helped! So, comments or advice, (or both) -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:18, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

This is lovely, but Brambleclaw is a deputy, he already has a deputy picture. Turn this into another brown tabby tom deputy. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:22, December 9, 2009 (UTC). This is the warrior blanh Icestorm(unless you want to be called Jinglestorm) and he also has a warrior image unless theirs another Brambleclaw I dont know of.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I know. That is my point. Sorry up on that comment i meant tabby tom WARRIOR. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:29, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Brambleclaw's already been done as a warrior. If you can find another long-haired brown tabby tom, you can resubmit it as that warrior. -- Tinsel claw  23:08, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

You could turn this into Tigerheart, but he already has an image. On the other hand, you could submit this as Littlecloud's warrior version, if you lighten the color, or you could make it Brokenstar's warrior version, and "break" the tail. But all of them have images already. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:17, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Crowfur- For Approval
The highlight on his hind leg is really bugging me. I've played around with it a lot, but can't get it to look quite right. Any suggestions? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 22:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Good; but the color seems to cut off at the head and into a lighter area...? The scars could be blended more. And maybe darken the shading. Other than that it seems fine.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 22:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

This is good, but is the muzzle supposed to be white? Or is it tinged silver because of age? If it's tinged silver, I'd smudge it then blur it into his face, because it looks like he was born with that color muzzle. Btw, I LOVE how you do that missing fur! Did you do Graypool too? You're really good at that!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:40, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall, I did Graypool. Anyway, onto the image. The whiskers look like they have a couple missing pixels; fix that. Great job, otherwise:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 22:54, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry Flamingmom!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:55, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay, everyone makes mistakes:D --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 22:57, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Good job! Just blur the ear pink more. Oh, and did you reserve Crowfur on the Project page, 'cause I didn't see it. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:09, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Woody - For Approval
I like his name:D Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 22:56, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Woah! That's incredible! Way better than what I could do--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:58, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Wai thank you:D --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 23:00, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Swallowtail (A) - For Approval
My second apprentice, fourth charart. Comments? Criticism? Her article didn't specify what color her eyes were, so I chose amber. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see her eye color at all--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:20, December 9, 2009 (UTC)