Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 116

Snowy (Q) - Approved
Hey there. I like this very much. / Changes here if needed 23:47, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source. Also, the shading on the belly and hind legs seems quite gray. 23:50 Thu Jul 3

Question: How do you define the light source? As for the shading, I'll have that up in a moment. 23:52, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups  23:54, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Defining the light source means to make the light face the same way everywhere on the cat. So let's say that your light source in in the top right corner. Everything in shadow would be everything from the bottom left corner. Idk I'm bad at explaining. As for the shading, It wasn't that gray. Now you need to define it. Sorry for the trouble! ^-^` 2:23 Fri Jul 4

Define the light on her foreleg farthest from us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:17, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups  15:22, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front two legs. Darkness-wise, I think they're pretty good, but they could use some slight definition. She's looking good, Rocket. Keep up the amazing work.

Re-Ups Thank you, Jayce :)  14:39, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading near the belly is a bit blotchy- blur it. This is good .o. 21:24 Sat Jul 5

Re-Up  21:28, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Any comments? 16:31, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading ont he bottom of the face and on her front left paw 17:16, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up  17:45, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us? As in, the one in the air? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:55, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. 15:52, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define, don't darken, the shading.

re-Up  17:20, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Now the shading looks blotchy O.o Blur it, please. 11:36 Sun Jul 13

re-up  15:42, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks really dark for a white cat... maybe lighten it up a little bit?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:36, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. I don't really want to lighten the shading anymore than this, and the shading darkness /apparently/ is the artists choice unless it's too dark or too light... oh well. Feel free to flame me as you wish. i like this tho 00:36 Mon Jul 14

Sharpen the facial shading a bit and thin it out. Blur the tail shading a little more, and thin out the shading on the legs. Be sure to blur the shading on her front right leg, too! Lightening it would probably help make it look softer, or tinting it, too. For white cats, I usually tint my shading a little bit blue (so I choose a very dark, gray-blue to color with) which helps make a white cats' fur seem soft. Or if I want to give them thin fur, I tint it a red instead. Tinting is optional, but really helps add depth. 19:00, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. http://www.ezimba.com/work/140716C/ezimba17991082104600.png I really don't like this now. I thought it was /fine/ before, tbh. e.e 23:11 Tue Jul 15

What'cha upset for, Rocket? I quite like this how you have it, and I like it so much, we're gonna CBA it. =)

8-D It actually looks different from when i uploaded it, my computer has a habit of making images merge when i upload things too quick for whatever reason. Thank you, Jayce. wooooo CBA! 23:36 Thu Jul 17

Approved.