Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 229

Starlingfeather (Elder) - Approved
o- owo?? 22:20, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

O-OWO??? this is super cute!! maybe darken the texture a little more? 23:55, May 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The texture is rougher and the base is darker on the StarClan. 00:31, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light source?  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:26, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like it's coming from the top at a diagonal angle. 17:28, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I see some where its coming from, I'm asking them to define it more.  Ellie  life is an illusion 01:55, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 13:58, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more light to the ---> ear and the tail? This is very pretty :) 18:30, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks! Re-Uploaded! 14:11, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add more light to the tail? I'm seeing that its all shadowy atm  Ellie  life is an illusion 07:12, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 13:09, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:38, May 28, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 13:09, May 29, 2019 (UTC)

Gray and white warrior ~ Approved
it's texture not stripes

I know you said it isn’t stripes, but, on the body they look like stripes in my opinion. It might just be because they are going horizontally, so maybe changing the direction might help?

Re-uploaded

Idk if it’s me but they look a bit cross eyed?? This is so pretty though. :) 04:14, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded thanks

CBA? 12:37, May 28, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 13:09, May 29, 2019 (UTC)

Orange and gray cat (W) - Approved
failed to match my own pattern, rip 10:23, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

define shading depth

Can you make the gray look more gray? It looks brown to me. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  13:33, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

looks like a brown-gray to me.

Yeah never mind, it looks gray on my computer but brown on my phone. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:18, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I think it could be made more gray, it looks dusky brown to me  Ellie  life is an illusion 17:42, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Mink. 17:53, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

the gray is completely desaturated tho, it probably looks brown because there are tufts of ginger mingled with the gray. idk what i can do about it 03:20, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

for reference the gray i used is 56564c 03:21, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

reup changed a few things about the way the fur is textured and maybe it helped, idk. but i honestly see that its gray (like slightly brown but its still gray) and a few other ppl agree, and i know that i used a non-brown gray, so imma wait for more opinions 07:08, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hm, I think it's good in this case... it's pretty obvious it's gray-and-ginger (which iirc is technically some kind of tortie). The only thing is, Burnt, could you possibly define the shading a little bit overall? I'm not sure if it's my laptop or this stunning pattern, but I'm having a very rough time seeing the shading.

reup thank you :) 03:21, May 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:33, May 28, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 13:09, May 29, 2019 (UTC)