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Willowpelt (Q) - Tweaked
OA was Bramble. I re-did the shading, and the eye color didn't look like her warrior one, so I made them more alike. Comments? 23:43, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know you didn't tweak the earpink, but can you blur it please? Nice work on the shading. 23:49, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I forgot to thank/mention Atelda for teaching me how to redo the shading. :3 23:52, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 99.89.95.201 00:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - ^_^ 00:11, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me up there. xD 00:12, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the non-shaded part on the belly over the the left and brighten the earpink. 02:16 Sun Nov 27

Re-Uploaded 05:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

And make that highlight bigger - 02:22, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 20:55, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lilystar (L) - Tweaked
Ehm, hello? Its me agin, I tweaked Lilystar, blurred hightlinks and darkened shadings..hmm it looks a little like redoned shadings o_O Oh and Darkhallows is OA 18:40,November 28,2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and neck shading a lot, and possibly tone down the eyes. 20:41, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the end of the haunch and white pixels on the tail, paws, and on the left side of the cat. 00:23, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, reuploaded 10:11,November 29,2011 (UTC)

Erase the smudged lineart on the haunch. 02:04 Wed Nov 30

Its not smudged but i made somethig different, i think now it isnt looking like it 07:15,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Nah it still looks a little weird. And it is smudged, even though I know it wasn't you who smudged it. It's "part of the blank" but it's not supposed to be. Erase it and smudge the pelt into the earpink. 03:50 Thu Dec 1

Lighten the paw shading it's darker than the rest. 12:10 Thu Dec 1

Cloudy Sun (SC) - Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this, 'cause no matter what I did (colourizing, dodging, whatever) it just ended up turning bright yellow or neon orange -_- I preferred the old version. But it did need to be pale... so comments? Oh, and the OAs were me and Scarlet 00:56 Tue Nov 29

Lovely! <3 Define the light on the tail, and define the earpink. 01:03, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded mreh 01:32 Tue Nov 29

Darken the stripes i can barley see them. 03:45, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:47 Thu Dec 1

Barkface (MC) - Tweaked
Just tweaked the shading, it was blotchy. OA was Icethroat21. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:36, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 01:06, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

And can you blur the ear-pink. 17:46, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt. W)~ Redone
The only thing that was passable about this image was the shading, and i made it before i used layers, so it was too hard to tweak so i redid it. Comments? 00:16, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit redder and blue it a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 01:49, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit. You already know of my feelings for this image <3 <3 <3 02:02 Wed Nov 30

Reuploaded- Got the ear pink off the chart. 02:12, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the bottom of the haunch a bit. Beautiful. 03:49, November 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded- Thanks. 22:15, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine; redone to match her other images. 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the stripes a tad and blur them? 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 00:50, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and blur the shading on the belly. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh darn, I was kinda hoping to do this one. Oh well I've got plenty of images on my to-do list. XD Anyways, great job! Lighten and desaturate the whole image just a bit though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's this big patch of yellow waste near her tail, so erase that. xD 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and there's patches of yellow waste on her head, above our far front leg, and along her back. 02:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, they look brown like the pelt :3 02:58, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes lighter still. 03:31 Wed Nov 30

Whispering Breeze (Alt. SC) - Redone
Okay... I have been absolutely dying to redo this. The stripes looked all weird and the shading could've been defined, not to mention, I just hated it... OA was me. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:00, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

-squints- OA looks to be Nightshine to me. 02:54, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I remember when Scarletwind had this up for approval o.o Darken the shading a little. 02:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion, it's mine, I, being a total derp, had named it Whispering Breeze.alt.sharclaw.png or something like that. This is the renamed file made by Night Shine. ;P - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste on the back. Just a hint to help avoid waste - if you "lock" the alpha channel (the pixels without any colour on them) then you'll never have waste again 8D 03:43 Wed Nov 30

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:10, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink bigger? 04:10, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:17, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (E) - Redone
Had to be pale and match sharpclaw image. Comments? 03:28 Wed Nov 30

Define the ear-pink a bit more and I think I remember that she had a graying muzzle. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:43, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded derp how did I forget the graying muzzle. 03:50 Wed Nov 30

Make the gray more noticable - 03:59, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:49 Thu Dec 1

Fritz (KP) ~ Redone
OA is Moonpelt1786, and I got permission via IRC from Iceheart to redo this. I must say, he looks smexy. <3 05:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

He does look smexy. :3 Define the shading. 05:37, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does the darker shading look better, or, should I stick with the lighter? 05:44, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should stick with the darker shading. Make the nose a darker pink, it looks odd standing out like that. 23:30, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:33, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes look purple. :3 00:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the white part of the eye should be on the other side of his pupil. 00:18, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not changing how the eyes are, Oblivion. Every user has their own style. I did change the color though. Re-uploaded. 00:27, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And I respect that. However, because the light source is coming from the left, the white in his eye should be on the left as well. 00:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And that's where you're wrong. I do not have a light source. ;) 00:39, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

...yes you do. Since the shading is very clearly on the right side, it's coming from the left. You can't not have a light source. Light has to be coming from somewhere, unless it was pitch black, in which case you wouldn't be able to see him anyway. 00:44, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, I do not. All I do is trace the lineart with black, and blur it. There is no light source. Trust me, I know what I'm talking about. 00:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's a flipping pixil, don't worry about it. 07:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail (ki) ~ Tweaked
I just added the needed stripes for this little ginger cutie. :3 And yeah, I did base the pattern on his face on the pattern shown on the cover of Night Whispers. OA was Bramble with a tweak by Moonflight to make him long haired. Comments? 20:59, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Awww! Is it poosible for you to make the earpink less orangey red? Hey Shelly.... Penguiuuuiiinnn.....

Re-uploaded. 01:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define/Darken the shading. 05:37, Thu, Dec, 1, 2011

No, that isn't what is was on the tweak list for. All I needed to do was add stripes, I've already pushed it by changing the ear pink. 12:29, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad. Cute <3 19:58, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:35, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (e) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. OA was Mintstarr. Comments? 21:28, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the tail shading? 04:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Minnowtail (W) ~ Tweak
Her shading had to redone, and she had a lot of blurred lineart. Also had to re-do the earpink. 21:37, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink some? It's kind of hard to see 21:46, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the earpink. 22:17, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (E) - Tweaked
Here she is! Original artist was Flamingomom/Hawktalon, and it needed to have shading and earpink redone. Comments? 23:27, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is really hard to see. It should be the same color as the skin. Nice work. 23:43, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wait for changes... 00:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lionheart (D) - Tweaked
OA was Icecloud33. He needed thicker fur around his neck. 00:38, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you extend the bottom tip on the ruff down to match his warrior image? 02:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="">05:41, Thu, Dec, 1, 2011

It wasn't on the tweak list for shading, DJ. 17:57, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:57, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Jingo (Lo) - Tweaked
I think that this should be redone, but it needed to be more brown as it was looking a bit greenish. Original artist is Darkhallows. D= 01:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink tad. 01:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the eye colour. I don't think it should be redone, but mainly because I like the stripes. ^-^ 01:46, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

The chin looks like it has some blurred lines. Also, the missing tail-tip looks like the lines are sort of thin, could you thicken it by about one pixil? I've always liked her, she looks like my Hickory only shorthaired :3 02:18, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It you want to redo it, why not? Just keep the same pattern, because I'm quite fond of it. xD 03:20, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. What Cloudy said ^^ <span style="">03:29 Thu Dec 1

Brindleclaw (w) - Tweak
OA was Mistystar & the white needed to be smudged, but I couldnt get it to look like the patches so I smudged everything. - 03:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and darken the shading. <span style="">03:29 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded.- 03:36, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it a bit more? <span style="">03:37 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded - 03:43, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the original artist was Shadowedheart, then redone by Mistystar. Blur the earpink. 18:04, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleberry (MC) - Tweak
OA was Echomist, her shading was very light and needed blurred. I just went ahead and redid the shading. The spots look almost kind of gray to me, but meh...didn't mess with them. It also had a minor transparency issue, colored lineart, and I added depth to the eye. I <3 Brambleberry so much, she's my favorite character! Comments for improvement? 04:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink, thicken the shading on the tail and forelegs; it also looks like her right foreleg has no shading but that just may be my terrible eyesight... I <3 Brambleberry too :) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ahead and just redid the earpink. I am her self-appointed biggest fangirl :P  04:27, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Goosefeather (MC) - Redone
I honestly don't know why this was even considered for a mere tweak. This image has been bugging me for a while. I am a lead, I can decide if an image needs tweaked or redone, so don't start anything. The speckles/spots looked very little like his elder image. Also, the image had shading issues. I noticed that in his description he has frazzled whiskers, ragged ears, and shaggy paws, so I felt those needed to be added as well. OA was Flamingomom3. One last thing, I felt the orangish-brownish herb adds a nice touch based on his character, so I refuse to make it green like the other's. Comments for improvement? 07:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pwetty! Mak ethe ear-pink a bit smaller and blur it. :3 <span style="">12:16 Thu Dec 1

Well, since it says he needed shaggy paws, could you add some fur sticking out from his paws and not just his ankle joints? 12:33, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It did look kinda funky to me anyway  16:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno... it may just be me, but I think it'd fit better with a long-haired blank. I think the fuzzy feet look out of place on a short-haired blank. Just my opinion, of course. 17:56, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

That's kind of what I thought too, but I didn't want the elder to have to be redone too if we can help it, ya know? But I do agree  18:01, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It wouldn't be a difficult redo to tweak the elder image as well to be long haired... I'd do it for you, but I've already got two images up. I don't think there would be any objections. :\ 18:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, why not make it long haired? Shelly's got a good point, when it comes to the fuzzy feet. I think he's probably got shaggy fur in general, but we only know about the paws. xD 18:32, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Snowdrop (KP) - Redone
You wouldn't believe what program I used to make this. I have permission, original artist was Icecloud, and the shading needed to be thickened and blurred, and there was blurred lineart. Comments?

She should be lighter; right now she looks pale grey. 21:41, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just noticed I forgot to sign. I used Pixlr to make this. 21:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)