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Minnowtail (Alt. A2) ~ On Hold
I think I made her too dark >m< I shall fix that.... Anywho, she was described with a dappled pelt~ Comments? 23:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, especially on the back ear. I love it! 8DDD 23:17, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes arent showing :c 00:08, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the nosepink. Looks pretty! 8D 08:13, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the face just a tad. Nice job, Fallow. 11:15, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Fallow! C: Define the earpink. 14:47, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks everyone ^^ 16:58, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the belly a tiny bit? :3 04:14, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face, too. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  11:23, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 16:27, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? :3 14:46, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is great and all, but who says that was a mistake? It was never stated otherwise, she could very well be a dappled dark gray cat.... 23:21, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I was thinking, I think that since she was only mentioned once it would be an alt but I think that this should be the main apprentice image and the warrior should be changed. 23:27 Sun Mar 25

Paleclaw's right. We're already having a discussion about partial-description alts, and this would be partial. She already is gray, in this image, just mentioned with dapples. All cats have some kind of pelt pattern, for what I know, but it just may not be visible. Plus, dapples don't make much of a difference, sorry. 23:34, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come cats like Lilystem get an alt. for being described as a tabby? I think this should stay. 01:53, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps Lilystem should be tweaked to a tabby then. Either way, I thought we decided something about what gets alts and what gets added? Didn't we decide that if it's completely plausible then it'd be added? I can't quite remember, but I thought that's what we worked out. Meaning this alt should be declined and all her images tweaked. 00:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Isn 't this sirt of assuming her description? We don't know for sure that she's actually a dappled cat, and it could very well be a mistake. But in any case, if this goes ahead, cats like Mudclaw would have to be tweaked too, and it seemd really unecessary. *Bad at making points* Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 00:07, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Skt's right. This is assuming descriptions, something we don't do here. If we don't assume with genders and eyelashes in the manga, then why are we assuming descriptions? I say we keep it, and if we find out later that she dappled, then we can delete this and tweak the others. It's not partial, honestly. We know she's gray. For all we know, the dappled coat could be an error. 06:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I've decided to place this image on hold until a final decision can be made. This is not to be declined, approved or archived until said decision is reached. 07:05, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

-didn't notice Misty left a comment- Should I reupload or wait until we figure out what we're doing with her? 13:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploading. Cloudeh told me to start up the discussion so... I think this should stay an alt. It was the only time she was described with it, and she has never been described with dapples in the alligiances. 18:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think she meant start it on the talk page. XD But really, since when do we not add descriptions purely cause they were only mentioned once? If we did that, Spottedleaf wouldn't have half her description, Firestar wouldn't have a pale belly, Brindleface wouldn't be mottled, so and and so forth. We shouldn't assume it's wrong just cause it was only mentioned once. 08:44, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oakstep (Lo) - CBA
Hmmmm..... I'm never doing stripes with the pencil again. XD This is the best I could do to match it. Comments? 00:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading and darken the overall shading a tiny bit~ Also, smudge the earpink into the ear a bit, and the stripes on the tail seem to be edging away from the lineart along the bottom... I hope that made sense... Fix it? OuO 03:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 13:59, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm so laaaaazy 01:11, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mounty likes this. Mounty is gonna CBA. 01:52 Tue Apr 3

Kestrelflight (Alt. MCA) - For Approval
It's been forever since I had something up for approval. Trying a new style of mottled cats but I think he looks a bit like a tabby... He was described as a mottled gray tom in Hollyleaf's Story under the name of Kestrelpaw and Barkface was the medicine cat, so he was a mca. Comments? 01:57, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah he does look like a tabby. Isn't this supposed to match my mottled gray version anyway? 01:59, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I honestly have no idea how you did that, it's incredible. But I tried. 02:11, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I can always send you the .xcf, if you like C: Also, I used the pen jitter tool with a darker and lighter shade, then slightly blurred it. 02:12, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'd love that. I PM you my email on facebook. Thanks Ivy! 02:19, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this, so I can work on a rogue. Anyone who wants to take this over, may. I had no hope of matching Ivy's epicness anyway... 20:06, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 06:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt.A)~For Approval
I don't think I uploaded it right, but I tried. Comments? 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded-- got rid of the waste 18:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I don't know what happened to the last one. It's not in the declined nor in the approved, I thought this was being worked on already. 19:33 Fri Mar 30

No, it's fine. Mounty, you derp. =P

Define and darken the shading. 20:23, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Heathertail.apprentice.alt.png. 20:32, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Defined and darkened the shading and renamed it 21:29, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Loonie, would it be instead because Heathertail has another one? 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, head, and back paws. 21:50, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

When did that get there? *wasn't there before* smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. 22:36 Fri Mar 30

Define the shading, and I think there's waste on her front paws as well. 03:52, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Got rid of the waste and defined the shading 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

The ear-punk ear-pink seems to go over the line thing next to the ear... o3o On both ears, by the way. It's your choice, but if you want to, can you define the depth in the eye? *Your choice* Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, too. And it might just be my computer, but there seems to still be waste, too. Sorry if that made no sense about the ear and the line and the ear-punk ear-pink x3 13:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more ^^ 13:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the back ear. And, optional, but can you add a little shading to the side of the face that's not towards us? It'll give it more depth. 21:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC

Reuploaded--defined the shading, smudged the earpink into the pelt and got rid of the waste 22:41, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste on his ear, back paw, and front paw. 23:03, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink some more and blur it. 23:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this. And try to not upload a different image every time you reupload. 23:45, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--removed the waste and blured the earpink into the pelt 21:48, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Moonshine, stop uploading a new image each time. Rename it what Atelda told you to. 21:56, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I tried but it became a redlink. I don't know what to do! I am sorry 22:00, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

You just upload it as   Just...it works for everyone, it should work for you. >.> Also, erase the waste. 22:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--erased the waste 18:56, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste by the far ear. 01:24 Tue Apr 3

Red (R) - For Approval
classic tabby fail. see it here as changes aren't showing. comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 05:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thin out the main body stripes a tad? I did Fleck as a classic tabby if that helps. Marvelous <3 05:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 05:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. clicketh for changes  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 05:41, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <3 Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  23:18, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Tess (Ro) - For Approval
Uh.....I'm indifferent about this one...I didn't have my tablet on hand and I just am out of practice with GIMP...kinda.... Uh...if the changes aren't showing, you can look here. o3o 05:06, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the top haunch shading 05:07, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:10, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Just blur the shading just a bit where the leg is. Cinder14:36, April 3, 2012 (UTC)(Sig isn't working)

Reuploaded c: 16:09, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Snapper (Ro) - For Approval
Yeah. I modeled him after my cat. Problem? *trollface* (here if the changes won't show) Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 06:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

This is the wrong version of the blank. There's no fur on the back of his arm nor his hock, and that weird random spot on his tail wasn't fixed. Look here for the correct version. 10:26, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a little. Very, very impressive :) 15:59, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Your cat is lovely, define the ear-pink please, I think its too small..or I need glasses. ,16:50,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Coal (ro) ~ For Evaluation
My first rogue!! Okay, whaddaya think? 06:54, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add earpink and it seems like the shading/highlights are cut off at the tail, make sure it goes all the way through to the end. 06:58, 02, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded as you can probably tell, earpink=not my strong point. >.> 07:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

P.S. Changes are more than likely not showing. -_- Try Here 07:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it tons. 08:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be named Coal.rogue.png. You can re-upload over the previous file, which is found here. 08:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and re-named Here 08:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

You also need to change the file that's shown on the top of the section. I changed it for you this time, but please keep it in mind for next time. 09:06, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

This is the wrong version of the blank. There's no fur on the back of his arm nor his hock, and that weird random spot on his tail wasn't fixed. Look here for the correct version. 10:26, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and at the very darkest points, it almost looks like pure black. Lighten it a tad so we can see the lines. 15:57, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Here

Don't forget to sign! Blur the shading tons. 15:15, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ro) - For Approval
I actually like this one. If changes don't show, look here. Comments? 07:49, 02, 04, 2012

Lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  13:34, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the shading some, if you will :)  15:56, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Look here if changes don't show. =/ 02:06, 03, 04, 2012

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and define the shading under her neck/chin. 11:38, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ro) - CBA
Look here if changes aren't showing. Really, this is ridiculous. I'm looking up and down the approval page and all I see is old blanks... 10:05, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great. Maybe the claws could be added, because thats part of his decription. Just a suggestion. 10:08, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -is a fail because she forgot his fail claws- 11:22, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think they look good. Honestly, I really can't draw claws and when I do they look horrible. 11:27, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and tail. Lovely, Loonie. =3 14:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadeth 21:28, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on his rump :3 21:29, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

No there isn't... O_o 23:57, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There isn't a white pixel, I agree. Anyways, this looks amazing. CBA? 23:59, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

-doesn't feel this is important enough to pause CBA- No...there's a white pixel right under the tail, where it meets his rump. Rowan isn't crazy. xD 03:57, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) - For Approval
Any comments on improvement ? Makimotto 11:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

Wrong file name. Honestly, I don't see what's so hard about re-uploading over File:Yellowfang.rogue.png. 11:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  13:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine...It looks cool this way honestly. I think that shading should be artist choice. Shading can be hard or soft, you know. 13:37, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a kit so this is under evaluation. I think this is over 80% All of the colors are right, it's the right size, and there is no blurred lineart from what I can tell. Just add the line on her muzzle like the rest of her images and make the lineart on the ear a pixel bigger. This looks wonderful! 13:41 Mon Apr 2

Agreed. Makimotto will become an apprentice of PCA, and the heading is changed to For Approval. 15:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

No, she had shading like this before, and that's why her images were redone, unless you want to revert all of her new images to the old version. So, as nice as it looks, you need to blur the shading. 15:55, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Or the other images could get a shading tweak. Honestly, I like this version very much. Really well done. Just try to match the scars on the other images. There's no fur missing there. 16:20, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

While I like this shading, Ivy's right, we already tweaked her images before to get rid of it. It'd be pointless to tweak again, so please make it match. 21:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, the reason why this may look not blurred is because I added someshading where her fur would be all scragley. I tried to blur it really good without the whole light source disappearing. I also was going to add the line, but it kinda weird, but I can understand that you won't them to all look the same. I tried to Line up the scars, and a few are off, so sorry about that too. If you can't see it, here http://www.iaza.com/work/120402C/iaza15663796583500.png Makimotto 22:44, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

No, we want the straggly fur to be gone. As we said, her other chararts were tweaked to get rid of that. Blur the shading so it's smooth, not showing the fur. And I'm not sure you're understanding what we mean about getting rid of the lineart on the scars, but I don't know how to explain..... 23:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

K, I can get it gone... I just wanted it to look good, But I'll change it. And I didn't even see the part about getting rid of the lines. But ok, I'll do it. Makimotto 23:39, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto



Makimotto 00:25, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

Flick (Ro) Under Evaluation
I reserved it and finished as fast as I could. I hate this. Dx Changes might not be showing...Changes are here. Comments?

12:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, but needs a transparent backround 12:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Grr. I know. I can't get a transparent background... when I took the blank from the charart page, it was white... 12:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a proper light source and define it. 14:29, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I can make it transparent for you if you dont know how to do it, ,16:47,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks :) 21:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, reuploaded. Experimenting with fur textures. Gahh, changes ain't showing, look right here. I lightened the neck shading just a little bit. Yuck, yuck, yuck. I also have one without the texture so if you want to see, tell me. 01:31, April 3, 2012 (UTC.

The fur texture looks like mottles. Define the shading and light source. Don't worry, practice makes perfect! Also, blur the earpink. 05:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

All right C: Redone. I made one without texture and one with, but I'm going for the one with texture, even though it's atrocious, it's the less atrocious of the two 05:35, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Ro) - For Approval
Comments? ,13:03,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Nice job~ 14:26, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

When you reupload, can you link us to the file? The Wiki isn't showing images and it would make this a lot easier for us crtiquers, thank you :) 15:53, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

You cant see it? Okay I upload it to my personal gallery...,16:13,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Here: look. ,16:18,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Onion (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments? &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 14:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please reupload this, then link us to the version in the file history that will show? The images are being stupid and showing the old rogue. Thank you. 15:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I reuploaded it but the changes still won't show. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 16:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/8/8b/20120402160200%21Onion.rogue.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 16:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the black, and define the shading. Hmm... nice work, Aeris. 17:40, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. If it doesn't show when I publish this I'll give the picture. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:46, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza13142513712900.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:50, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the black a little more. 18:20, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza13142517012200.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 18:24, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it even more. You'll not destroy anything with it. ,18:57,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Ro) ~ For Approval
It sucks. Don't look at it Dx Anyways, I had no idea what to make to nose color. Changes may not be showing... comments? 16:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, they aren't showing, so look here. 16:05, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Theres a lot of waste around, erase it and blur the shadings ,16:22,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I broke the shading ;-; 16:31, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

No, good, its only a little lighter..can you darken the legs like before and make something with that dark patch of shading on his flank? Maybe just lighten it a little...and blur the ear pink into the fur..if you can, ,16:44,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Hmmm... better, better... 18:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Waste, agin! But yes its better, nice job. ,18:53,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hate waste ._. 20:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and earpink a bit. 21:07, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re=uploaded =^w^= 10:54, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Waa Im annoying whah, there is a patch of light on his back, blur it please. ,13:30,April 3,2012 (UTC)

Misha (Ro) ~ CBA
16:41, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and the ear-pink looks a little neonish. 21:06, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Shading an earpink is fine. Just define the nose pink, 'Teldy. =3 She's cute!~ 22:40, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I do think the earpink looks a bit neon, actually.. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:16, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Why you guys so conflicted Dx lol, so I de-saturated the earpink slightly, and made the nose pink more noticeable. 03:25, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 06:23, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Stripes (Ro) - For Approval
He's a classic tabby! Comments? 17:31, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome job! ^^ Darken the shading. 18:20 Mon Apr 2

Reuploaded 20:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some more. 21:05, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, smudge the stripes in the way the fur goes and layer the shading on top of the stripes 21:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

This is the wrong version of the blank. There's no fur on the back of his arm nor his hock, and that weird random spot on his tail wasn't fixed. Look here for the correct version. 23:58, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? 00:10, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel behind the back haunch closest to us. 01:06, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste behind the front legs. 03:03 Tue Apr 3

Tigerstar (Ro) ~ CBA
http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/5/5f/20120403020448!Tigerstar.rogue.png I was actually going to sit out the rogue rush, but I decided that I might as well do Bird and Tigerstar since I already did them before. Comments? (I'm just putting the png versions as I upload so the changes show). 18:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I love this, Shelly. Can you define the scars on the tail a bit? 21:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great to me! CBA? 03:04 Tue Apr 3

Cora (Ro) ~ For Approval
Here she is. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. Comments? 20:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Here's the link to the image. 21:10, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The ahding was bad on that. He's another link: =P

Define the tail shading. 14:02 Tue Apr 3

Ravenpaw (Ro) ~ CBA
<3 the image can be seen here. 20:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail and the head. <3 It's great~ 20:19, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:23, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white chest, define the shading on the tail, and I'll CBA. =) 01:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:14, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 06:22, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ro) - For Approval
Meh, not as epic as all the other rogues up right now. :P Changes aren't showing, so the proper images is here; Yes I realize I forgot the scars, I'll add em next reupload. XD 23:18, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. <3 Amazing, typo sister! 23:31, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Russetfur (Ro) - For Approval
Comments? Changes probably aren't showing 23:27, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Fabulous! 03:05 Tue Apr 3

Shrewtooth (R)~For Approval
Here his is! I love doing black cats so.. Anyways, Comments? 23:55, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Rename it File:Shrewtooth.rogue.png (basically just get rid of the extra .png) and maybe define the shading~<3 01:20, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

I can see a bit of waste trailing off the ear. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  05:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Bramblestar (Le) ~ CBA
http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/5/58/20120403153225!Bramblestar.leader.png Bramblestar! Who called it? I DID! For months I've been pulling for this guy. Everyone else said it'd be anyone else, but NO. I CALLED it! WOO. Anyway, I made this... a month ago. The pale underside is a preference, and if you guys like it I'll nominate the other images for tweaking. If not, I'll remove it. 00:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

So beautiful <3. Define the scar. 00:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nooo, spoilers! Blur the shading. 00:12, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Wow! You got it, nice! It's a preference, but can you blur the stripes on the chest a bit? This is awesome. 00:57, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

You don't have to...but maybe expand the right side of the pale chest a little? C: Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 01:04, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I made the scar paler. At this point the scar is older than it is in the other images, and could have changed color or had scar fur grow over it. 02:02, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

That sounds good, Shelly. I bet it'd an old wound. This is a bit of a preference, but the highlight on the flank looks a bit like a line rather then a round pool of line. This is honestly one of the most beautiful things I've every seen! Maybe blur the stripes above the eyes a touch as well. 02:08, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Whatever it was you just said, I hope I did it right, Scarlet. 15:33, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm.... CBA? I simply adore this, Shelly. 15:40, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lilykit (Ki) ~ For Approval
http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza18027888334400.png here It goes here :33 Mounty likey. Changes aren't showing for some strange reason. It's right here. Comments? I'm really sowry Atelda ;.; 00:40 Tue Apr 3

Wait for me to move the file please. D8 00:56, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

I was told to reupload it. I ish sowry :s. 00:58 Tue Apr 3 Blur the stripes on the legs and the stray square pixel on the face. This is really good! 01:00, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

The leg stripes are fine. 01:03, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm not gonna change the stripes. Changes are here if they're not showing now. 01:07 Tue Apr 3

I don't think she should have those gingery patches. Her descripton just says dark tabby and white. o3o Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 03:32, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

I looked up a torbie and it had those. I think it's fine. 03:35 Tue Apr 3

I know, but is she actually torbie? Unless there is a reference somewhere in the book, I think she's just tabby and white. -Hates self for messing with epic image- Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 03:38, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sky, she's not tabby and white. She's tabby with white patches. Google that description and you'll only find torbies. Google tabby-and-white and you'll get tabby cats with white undersides. I say the ginger should stay. 03:45, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, I know when I'm beat. -Raises white flag- In rhat case, blur the neck shading a little and define the leg shading a tad. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 03:54, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Eh I tried. Kit shading is hard. 04:03 Tue Apr 3

Snowy (Ro) - Under Evaluation
she's my first kitty up for approval! she looks a bit dark, *shrugs*

 Cloverstar  Let the leaves fall  00:53, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

I de-thumbed it for you. Don't thumb an image ;) Blur the shading lots. And it may be just me, but I honestly can't understand your light source. 00:56, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

...This shold be under evaluation, and rename this File.Snowy.rogue.png. To add on to what Leafy said, add a significant light source to the tail. Also, the earpink is covering the lineart, fix that. 01:00, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lol I TRIED do blur it and light up the tail! >o<  Cloverstar  Let the leaves fall  01:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

p.s (wait, i did it wrong, sorry!  Cloverstar  Let the leaves fall  01:33, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater)

re-uploaded http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza13183021295500.png

Don't thumb the image. Blur the shading a tiny bit more. 01:55, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this. Blur/smudge the earpink. 01:56, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

i'm sorry! i've shaded it all i can! =( http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza13183039746600.png

 Cloverstar  Let the leaves fall  02:01, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

You still have to blur the shading...And rename it ...I already told you to, and so did Atelda. And blur the earpink. The earpink is still covering some lineart, and it needs blurring. There's also a lot of blurred lineart. ...Did you do the other things other than shading that you were told to do? 05:16, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (D) - For Approval
Squirreldeputy! Getting those stripes the right colour was a pain... 01:02, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more like the warrior. -steals- Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 01:08, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's there, I promise xD 01:53, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smooth outh the floofs to more resemble the warrior? Don't have them stick out as much, but have them laying on each other... if my explination is made of too much fail, feel free to ask for a redline. 01:55, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful! I can't tell if there's a stripe above her eye or not and define the ear-pink. 02:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt. Ro) ~ For Approval
Yays! Everything is exactly the same as his old one so I'm not changing it. And to however is doing his main rogue(I don't want to do it) you can use this lineart. Comments? 01:11 Tue Apr 3

I've been told that the changes aren't showing. Look here. 03:14 Tue Apr 3

Half Moon (Alt. He) ~ CBA
Now, I don't want to hear any whining about there being no page number. I know it's a legit cite, but I don't currently have a copy of TLH to check. Anyways... Half Moon is epic. 02:58, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

8D Define the shading on her face and neck. 03:14 Tue Apr 3

Re-uploaded. 03:19, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 09:47, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Seedkit (Ki) - For Approval
http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/0/06/20120403042855%21Seedkit.kit.png Yeah...'Teldy's tired. ._. 04:29, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Cute <33  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 13:06, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Alt. Ro) ~ For Approval
I love black and white kitties. 8D Also, /please do not/ tell me to blur the shading. I like it this way, because it gives it more dramatic depth, and I think that's artist's choice. I made the claws on the fore paws longer so they looked scarier. =3 Comments for improvement? 04:55, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

He has another black and white alt, so make sure the things that can be seen, such as the legs, on that alt match. GORGEOUS. 07:10, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

He should have an underbite. (Unless that's Snake...>.>) Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  07:34, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Ro) ~ For Approval
That was quite fun to do.~ Comments, anyone? (Rogues FTW.) P.S. If it ain't showing up, here y'are: http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza17380243915600.png 06:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. 10:59, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. Nicely done, Thistle. 16:20, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) (Alt) ~ For Approval
I'm really proud of this :3 Changes aren't showing. 11:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste at the ears. Make her muzzle shorter and extend the line on her face. 13:33 Tue Apr 3

Leafstar (Ro)~ For approval


Don't thumb the image, remember to sign, and also...this needs to be Leafstar.rogue.png. You can re-upload over the original file, located here.. 16:19, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm in school right now and had an arguement with my language arts teacher, so I didn't get a chance to write anything. Anyway, Leafstar's rogue image for aprroval. I don't think she turned out half bad. Comments? 16:44, April 3, 2012 (UTC)