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Hawkheart (W)- Declined


Well, here's my first Charart.I had some trouble with the ear pink and highlighting but other than that I think it looks pretty good.Well you can go ahead and tell me how horrible it looks but,since this is my first charart I think it looks pretty good.I used Nightshine's tutorials and Bluestar's tutorials to learn how to do everything so I'd like to thank them. Flamewolf15 00:11, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Err, where is it? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:13, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Did you upload the file and need help linking it, or have you not uploaded it yet? -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 00:20, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted the image for you--  Night shine   ♣  00:24, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is good for your first image but the lineart is thin in some places and you need to blur the shading. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:38, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Well,I edited it and reuploaded it, but I can't figure out how to insert it into my post. Flamewolf15 01:01, February 22, 2010 (UTC)Well when you edit the section there is an option at the top that allows you to add images to the page. also reupload with the same image name. It saves space on the wiki. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:04, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted it again--  Night shine   ♣  01:05, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks to Nightshine for inserting the image.I thickened the line art in some places and tried to blur the shadowing some more.It'd help if you told specific areas that need blurring. Flamewolf15 01:09, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thats because it all needed blurring. The lineart is still thin mostly on the chest, I could fix it if you'd like. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:14, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I thickened the line art on the chest and between the hanch and the front leg I also blurred everything again and it seems that no matter how many times I try to upload an image it never shows up.  Flamewolf  03:32, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted the file for you. Next time dont take it off the page, just click on it and then upload a new version. Haikage Ash's Talk 11:40, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Okay,well is there any other lineart that needs to be thicker?Is there anymore blurring I need to do?And is there anything else that needs improvement or does he look fine the way he is?  Flamewolf  21:54, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart needs to look like this:. The shading on the back is still too thick and I don't see much shading anywhere else. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:11, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:Is this any better?The shading on the back is darking than the rest because he's facing toward the light source and because that's the way it looked after I blurred it in the editor.  Flamewolf  03:44, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

He looks very pink. He needs to be more brown like his Medicine cat image -  Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:45, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, a lot. Dark hallows 15:30, February 23, 2010 (UTC) ^

So, blur the shading and thinin it, (smooth it too) and make it more brown like | (I fail at making arrows.  Saint Ice   ♣  02:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

My oppinion is that the brown color you picked out looks a little pink or a little purple and the shading along its back needs to be blurred. Moonpelt1786 04:57, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

He needs to be blurred and his pelt is marroon. :) ♫ Misty ♫ 12:10, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his back needs to be blurred some more, and Misty's right, his pelt is maroon. Make it a little browner. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:50, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too dark and thick, and needs blurring. His pelt is maroon, he needs to be mottled, and his eyes are yellow, and they are supposed to be amber. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:33, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:17, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I am currently working on him and apologize for the amount of time it is taking.I have a few more things to work on and I will reupload him as soon as he is

finished.  Flamewolf  04:11, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. He looks like his back is just a darker colour. And he's STILL MAROON! Fix that, please!Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:25, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said,I am currently working on him and I am trying to fix everything that needs to be fixed.  Flamewolf  23:18, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's been a week, please work on this or it will be declined Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:55, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has been up for way too long with no improvements; we have to keep the rules fair for everyone. Declining. Please resubmit when you've made your improvements and have more time to work on him. ✐S aN  dY  18:24, March 13, 2010 (UTC)