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Rainflower (W) ~ CBA
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22:50, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

The shading seems too dark, though it could just be me/my screen. SquidwardPlays 22:53, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I agree, it could be smooth out on the cheek as well as lightened. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:55, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Agreed. Smooth it out on the legs too. Is there supposed to be shading on the muzzle? If it is smooth it out as well.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

should be some on the belly too. 23:14, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Shading and highlights both could smooth out a bit more. They look very stark. —​​​

It is (the shading) leaking away from the lineart on the back leg. 00:21, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

^ Along with that, some of it is leaking onto the lineart. —​​​

Her other images do not have texture, so I don't know why this image appears to have texture. 14:07, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

It doesn’t have texture, it’s just the shading ^^

15:25, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Don't forget to reups ;). Can you add some more shading along the bottom of the hind legs/paws and front paws? 23:07, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Could you also smooth the cheek shading some more, it seems blotchy and very stark to me. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:56, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

can you smoothin out the shading, almose evrywhere? it dose look like texture. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 07:40, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Owl, it's suppose to look like that. The shading is artists choice. There are different types of shading styles and textured is one of them. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   08:46, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Is that shading on the muzzle? It looks kind of odd and out of place. 14:15, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

reups

15:48, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the face seems to be a different colour than the shading on the rest of the body, could you change that? :) 16:17, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

reups

17:20, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

the shading on the front leg that gose to the back, can you smoothen that out? it looks flat.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:42, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

The shading still looks very blotchy. Is there anyway you can maybe like - take another colour to use to blend the shading? I can't explain it so here's an example of what I mean, sjsfkljdkf. —​​​

Lower the opacity? That may help.

with this kind of shading, you want to be adding much more lighter streaks around the darkest areas so it ends up as the rough gradient ur aiming for. 12:10, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

reups

14:34, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the paws closest to us? 17:33, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the neck shading or just lower the opacity of it?

I think maybe lowering the opacity of the overall shading would do the trick, Ari, instead of smoothing it out. I see the kind of shading you're going for and I like it. That being said, could you actually tick the opacity of the shading by just a little bit? I feel it's a tad dark. ​​​​

reuploaded

17:54, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

This may because of the Warrior blanks anatomy is a bit weird, but can you define the neck shading a bit better? I'm sure its because of the blank but sjhjsdh. Maybe like this? —​​​

reuploaded this is really hard xd

13:45, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

Very nice, Ari! the shading by the bottom of the head and shoulder looks a little dark compared to the rest. Could you either lighten that just a tick or darken the rest to match?

reuploaded17:50, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 00:05, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt W) ~ For Approval
She looks like she has blue eyes in the picture. Kind of like this one. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:24, 12/24/2018 ]

Reuploaded Made the texture more visible. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:29, 12/24/2018 ]

Can you lighten the haunch shading a bit? And I’m not exactly sure what your light source is. 13:42, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded when you put shading on the lineart layer Hope this makes a difference? the tail shading was ruining the light source. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:51, 12/24/2018 ]

The shading looks lke it's leaking way from the lineart on the back a smidge Malina457 (talk) 14:59, December 24, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define the shading on the right front leg--Potato Flakin (talk) 15:55, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, define the shading on all the legs 17:32, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink a bit! :) 20:12, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Silverfur   skz  [ 03:17, 12/25/2018 ]

Define the light on the legs.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:35, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

'''Reups. Silverfur  skz  [ 04:15, 12/25/2018 ] '''

This color doesn't quite look like it matches the image color very well. Is that where you got this color from? ​

I got it from the starclan one, but i'll change it. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:07, 12/25/2018 ]

Understandable, but I think in this case, it should match the field guide images that it's meant to depict. You didn't do anything wrong, I just think it was a miscommunication as to what image you should get coloring from.

Reups! Does it look better? -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:10, 12/25/2018 ]

She needs to be a lot more orange, just like the image from The Ultimate Guide/Cats of the Clans. If you need to, I can help you get an appropriate color. ​​​​​​

I colorpicked from her head/neck. Wait i'm gonna reup and if it doesn't look good then you could help. Silverfur  skz  [ 11:41, 12/25/2018 ]

Reups The color looks unnatural imo. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:42, 12/25/2018 ]

It has to match what we're given, unnatural or not. She's still not looking orange enough.... I'll see what I can do, but given the lighting and how these are painted, it might not be possible to get a good pixel to pick from. ​​​​

Humor me and see what #D9994A looks like. I saw where you colorpicked from the head, and I'm thinking there's a lot of light there in general. ​​​​

Looks a bit golden yellow in #D9994A. Let's see how it looks  Silverfur   skz  [ 11:52, 12/25/2018 ]

Reups Looks okay I guess. Silverfur  skz  [ 11:54, 12/25/2018 ]

I think it also might be your shading color...each pixel in her image is a totally different color, making picking extremely difficult. Leave it like this for now, and if someone else comes along with a better alternative that still looks ginger, then go ahead and change it....her art doesn't really show her as pale, but more of a neutral ginger coloring. ​​​​​​​​

Define the earpink a bit, and --> hind leg shading is receding away from the lineart.​ Also smooth the shading out on --> hind leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:21, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Oops I forgot something- Define the tail shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:24, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the < side of the haunch 03:38, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups  Silverfur   skz  [ 04:20, 12/26/2018

Define the light on the tail and lower the opacity of the shading a bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 05:58, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

reups   𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [ ]

Hmm... disregard this if you are the OA of the set, but I don't think the pelt colour matches the queen. Or vice versa, unsure of which one will be considered the first in set, but the colours should stay consistent to match. —​​​​ Realized yours is first in set, nvm. —​​​​

Reups Fixed some issues -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [09:03, 12/27/2018 ]

Riverstar (Alt Lo) - CBA
02:04, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the white on the muzzle a bit more? This is cute. ^^ —

Smooth out the haunch/flank shading a bit? 21:42, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Is this better? Also did what Winter told me to smudge the white on the eye. 18:32, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 02:01, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt D) ~ CBA
Trying to match File:Squirrelflight.FG-6.png. Not quite sure about the eye color, but this was fun. 15:58, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front legs a little?  G o  p  h  e  r  p  a  w  Me rry Ch ri st ma s!     16:27, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

This is absolutely stunning. On the TUG image, she doesn't have any white on her back paws. Can you remove it from the back paw closest to us? 18:25, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 19:32, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste near the tail.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:39, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Think I got it. 01:12, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

the shading on the belly confuses me, it would be like that if the light were coming from underneath her, can you do somthing about that? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:09, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups The light source is coming from <--- that direction and not from underneath. 23:11, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? fantabulous

Little Mew (Ki) - For Approval
And the award for the cutest kitten name ever goes to... 22:55, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

There's some gray fur on top of his/her head. Is that meant to be there? The nose appears to not be filled in.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:38, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry Potato, but the nose is filled in a hot pink color and the tufts are edged with black. I don't see what you're talking about. 00:10, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I think Potato is asking why the head tuffs appear lighter than the rest of that area. 03:28, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I can't see shading, might be my screen. 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣  𝓼𝓴𝔃  [03:46, 12/27/2018 ]

Oh sorry, I misunderstood. The description says they have a lighter tuft of fur on their head. Also, may I have a second opinion about the shading? I can see it pretty well. 13:30, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

While I agree the shading is visible, it almost seems overblurred. Defining your lightsource should help, perhaps by defining the light on the hind paw, ---> front leg and haunch? 02:03, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

To-Be Blanks ~ For Approval
Alrighty let's do this. I'm only gonna post one at a time for my sanity sorry ;u; 01:03, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Please do not apologize for posting one at a time, it is obviously going to be stressful if you do two, so do not overwork yourself. Not sure if this makes any sense, but the blanks look a tad crooked. I am not really sure how to explain it though... does anyone else know how to? 01:07, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Nice! Could you make these a bit bigger? They’re small, not much bigger than the kits, and lots of us want those bigger. Not too much, just maybe apprentice size? :) 01:10, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I think I know what could help the crookedness. The stomachs right now look really unnaturally flat. Their chest (rib cage more specifically) is supposed to stoop a little lower than the stomach. If you need me to, I can highlight an example. 01:14, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Another thing, the pose is a bit stiff and rigid. I know this was the original pose, but it is almost unnaturally rigid with how the joints are positioned. 01:17 Thu Dec 27

Reups Took longer that I thought, but how's that size wise? @Sun, I'm honestly not sure how to address your concern. And @everyone, any red lines you are willing to provide, please go ahead! ^^ 02:42, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make a small line for a mouth, kinda like the deputy blank? :) 02:47, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Round the ears a tad and the floof on the longhair looks flat. Curve the lineart to flow with the floof if ya get what I mean.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:18, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I'll do a skeleton thing when I get home. It's an easy fix, actually. 13:44 Thu Dec 27

http://i63.tinypic.com/2en6gqe.png Here we go. The red is muscles/mass, the blue is the skeleton. 17:15 Thu Dec 27

Reups Thanks Sun! 19:19, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

can you shorten the neck a little? it looks to long.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:33, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 23:27, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

the paws look slightly too big for the legs. 23:57, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Slash (Alt le) - CBA
back at it! 03:02, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded to fix the things commented before I withdrew it (face shading and tail light source) 05:07, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

i'm in love with the shading on this^^ CBA? ;3

Firestar (Alt D) ~ For Approval
haven't done a deputy image in ages

Can you define the backend shading? 10:09, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I assume this is what you meant

Littlecloud (MCA Alt2) ~ CBA
not sure how i feel about this, but it's late, so here's to

Lower the opacity of the facial shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 05:54, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

The facial shading is fine; shading doesn't need to be the same darkness throughout the entire image. ​

Define shading on the <-- back paw 10:10, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Love it! CBA? 03:30, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Onestar (Alt W) ~ For Evaluation
Should match his description from TUG CloudymoonTheCat

Hm, might just be me or the coloring, but the shading along the lineart seems to be leaking pretty much everywhere.

15:34, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

You did the stripes amazingly! But, Define shading all over except for the tail. And since you're still a kit iirc, until a kit is promoted to apprentice it should be For Evaluation, but correct me if I'm wrong. SquidwardPlays 15:50, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

On the topic of shading, is it tinted? Tinting it with a color might help me see it better. Potato Flakin (talk) 16:16, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

It would be 'For Evaluation', yes. Also, make the stripes thinner and add more of them, per the leader alt it needs to match

There needs to be more white in between the light brown. The leader alt also appears to not have any dark brown on it, so remove that. I forgot to say this is lovely Cloudymoon!Potato Flakin (talk) 19:29, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

In 'dark brown' do you mean the stripes or the base colour? Because he Have dark stripes if you zoom in CloudymoonTheCat

Lemme rephrase that- lighten them, they are way darker that the leader. I meant the stripes.--Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt Star) - For Approval
Everything is from the warrior. 16:57 Thu Dec 27

Shouldn't she be longhaired? It looks great, BTW! CloudymoonTheCat

the image it's based off is shortahired. 19:38, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt W) - For Approval
I love to make charart ;w;. First tabby, I like how it looks myself, so i'm pretty proud. I tried to match the Deputy above on the page as best as I could. SquidwardPlays 02:20, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

This looks great! Would you like the file? 02:31, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, yes, please and thank you! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:33, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I fumbled around once I received the Deputy file, I personally think it looks and matches better, but let's see what else there is to be said. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:22, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Very good!! Could you make the earpink a bit lighter? it doesn't look quite so dark on the deputy.

03:28, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Easy problem easy fix~ Turns out that there was just too much shading on that spot, I lessened it on that spot. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:32, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Accidentally produced some waste, gotten rid of it. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:33, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

There's some waste outside --> that front leg, this is absoulutely lovely.Potato Flakin (talk) 05:04, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Windstar (Alt. Ro) ~ For Approval
All colors from alt leader. Comments? 03:11, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

The facial markings seem.. Bolder and like there's more there than in the leader, if that makes sense? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:23, December 28, 2018 (UTC)