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Thornclaw (Alt. A) - For Approval
He has one for the kit, and the cite is real this time. I double-checked with some people in chat. Described as ginger. Comments? 19:04, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. 19:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color more ginger-y. He looks brown, and define the shading and highlights. 19:09, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And fix the earpink on both ears. The pink is covering little bits of lineart. 19:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink's match and redder 21:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I should know it's real, I added it. XD anyway, there's lighter ginger on his face, so maybe make the body that colour? Skt Spoilers... 22:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. You have barely any shading, there's no light source, there's miscoloured lineart, and I can hardly see the stripes. You have one week. 02:35, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

And just a warning, it's currently being discusses whether Brackenfur and Thornclaw's main description should be ginger, so this may end up being declined.... we'll have to wait and see for other's opinions on the discussion, but technically since they were first mentioned as ginger, it's quite likely they'll be changed. 05:56, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, why would it be declined? If it was changed, couldn't this just become the normal apprentice? Skt Spoilers... 06:02, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Not for sure. More likely that the normal apprentice would be tweaked, as it's an extremely simple tweak. Eh, I don't know, we'll decide when and if it happens. 11:12, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Euploadedray(Re-uploaded) Good? 12:06, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the fur more orange to match the kit better? 19:59, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and make the stripes match the kit. ^^ Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 22:42, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear, and then smudge it and make the color match the kit. Also define the shading. 05:14, 29, 06, 2012

Define the ear-pink  16:02, June 29,2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the ear. 16:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add eye depth. 16:46, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the kit? 14:32, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, Sky already said that. 14:44, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I thought Boss said Re-Uploaded after it. e.e 14:46, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Yes, I was caught in the east coast storm so I was left without cable for the past two days. And Re-uploaded.-- 18:01, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think that this about 80% done. Does anyone else agree? 18:31, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't count but, yes. Fill the earpink in more. 17:00, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

This looks pretty 80% to me; heading changed. Blur the shading tons, and make the colour and stripes match the kit. 17:03, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes match the other apprentice image? 00:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? ☯ ~ S t o n e c l a <font color="#6E6E6E" face="Comic Sans MS">w <font color="#523014" face="Comic Sans MS">~ <font color="#000000" face="Comic Sans MS">☯ 06:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but my dad put stupid restraints on the computer so I can only access it between 8 A.M.-8 P.M. for 1 hour. x.x-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:58, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on his ear. 13:02, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink more pink like the kit, and fill the earpink in the whole ear and then smudge/blur it. 15:01, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:33, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- 17:34, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes so it matches the kit? 17:36, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up into the ear. 21:14, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more and smoothen out the highlight on the haunch. 23:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I just realized I forgot to define the shading, so I'll do that now. x.x-- 13:34, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and thicken the stripes a tad. 20:15, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:48 Mon Jul 9

Blur the stripes just a bit?-- 02:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit too. 02:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll thicken the stripes when someone tells me how.-- 12:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Excuse me? You do know it's a privilege to be able to do this image. It's not your own personal right. You being rude and demanding for someone to tell you how to do something is only going to get this declined. You could've said, "I'm sorry, I don't know how, can someone help me?" and we'd be willing and glad. But now I'm debating on not helping you and letting you figure it out for yourself. If you don't understand me, just re-read what you've written and think about how extremely rude and degrading it is. 16:31, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And Boss, what you said was uncalled for. Part of making these images is doing them on your own. We're not going to tell you how to do something. e.e

Sorry. It's just been my life has been a bit hectic lately, so I've been in a more grumpy and demanding mood. My apologies to all that I may have offended.-- 13:05, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

-I'm a little scared to comment but...- Define the shading some more, and smudge the earpink. It looks too straight-edged to me. 14:36, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Cranky people. XD To thicken the stripes, just run your brush over them so that the stripes themselves increase in size. If you're matching the kit, you also might want to take your brush and connect some of them. It'll take a bit of time, though. Breeze whisker  17:45, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hope it worked...-- 12:43, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Toward the back area, near the shoulder and on the tail on --> this side, the stripes blend in with the shading...fix that :3 13:33, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes more and smudge the earpink into the ear. -- 19:01, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and make sure that the stripes show through the shading on the back; maybe try shading with a different color? 13:33, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:40, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more please. <span style="">13:00 Sun Jul 15

Re-Uploaded-- 13:17, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading, and darken the stripes. 23:24, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:06, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. -- 07:47, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 20:30, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thunder (Ro) - CBA
Bleh. e.e I'm going away for practically 2 weeks after Tuesday, so if this isn't approved before then (which it won't) I'm giving it to Icy. Second image that I had to copy stripes from Roo xD Comments? 21:50, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and darken the shading. Define the earpink as well. 22:02, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

I really wanted this, so I'll become a warrior. Anyways, define the earpink a bit, it's kinda hard to see. 23:09, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink matches the other images, so it's fine.

Y u steal my reservation D:< Anyways, make the paws whiter and define the shading. Good job <3 01:16, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' pfft. you'll get this Tueday. 01:58, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and lighten up the shoulder and haunch so they look like they stick out. Breeze whisker  02:37, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pelt color and make the stripes... match more and more wavy xD <span style="">06:54, 09, 07, 2012 I don't want to leave this up for two weeks untouched. I get back Saturday night, but I have to leave again for a week on Sunday. This needs to get approved as fast as possible, and I promised I'd give it to Icy. So Icy, you may now takeover. 02:36, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Splook I love you dear. Anyways, redid it, cause if I got the xcf from Splook, my computer would probably explode. Roo matching your image...Why do your skills have to be so brilliant? 'Kay, comments? 02:44, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. Lovely~ 18:32, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thank you. 20:14, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

thicken the stripes a bit -- 20:57, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

They match the leader. 21:04, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Elo's right. Thicken them just a tad.

And lighten them. And the base coat. Also, make the shading conform to the bod more, it doesn't make much sense right now. 23:49, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Shading on ginger cats...Comments would be very much appreciated at the moment. 00:01, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the paw shading a bit~ 04:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading as it makes the stripes less visable, also maybe make the coat color more saturated? <span style="">05:45, 11, 07, 2012

Re-Uploaded: The color is from the leader. 15:37, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Color the shading then. The color doesn't quite match the leader, and if the base coat's the same color, it's probably the shading color. 05:40, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Roo told me that for the shading color, she either used a very darker version of the coat color or a dark gray, and I tried both, but I frankly think the darker coat color works better, so that's the one I went with. But if the coloring needs altering after this, trust me, I'll be glad to alter it. 12:48, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading, and it looks a tad too dark. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:10, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink a bit more 01:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading... and maybe give it some... red tinge? Sincerely: ChanCharm (Talk) 07:56, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The shading color is fine. 16:45, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Right, I got some tips from Roo, the current artist of Thunder's leader image, so she helped me a bit on adjusting this to make it match more. Ilu, Roo <3 20:10, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the base coat a little, it still looks a bit off. Breeze whisker  04:30, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 17:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

The shading and stripes I think could be a bit more reddish, and also blend the shading a bit more. <span style="">02:46, 15, 07, 2012

The base pelt is fine. And as for the stripes, only a tad bit more reddish. The shading's fine, imho.

Re-Uploaded: Made the stripes more reddish. Oh Luna what have I done   06:19, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but is there a chance of you tinting the shading? He's significantly darker in this than his leader, maybe tint the shading a very dark pink or red? 04:51, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Hope this is right... 22:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: That was a weird color. o.o 22:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. 02:41, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 03:26, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 07:58, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar(Lo)- For Approval
I'm not really sure how an auto-decline works.... sorry if I've done something wrong. Comments? Changes aren't showing, but pretty much all I did was erase the waste. 16:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The eye color looks like cream. 16:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in the white pixels. 16:35, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please try and make it match? The stripes are still off, and the cream is the wrong colour and in a different spot on her face than the leader. 16:38, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well, she's facing a different way than the rogue and queen, and most of the leader is the other side of her. 16:40, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

If your having troubles with the colors just try to take them from one of her other images. Just because she´s facing the other way I still think the stripes should be the same. But that could also be the artists opinion... Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave!  17:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not change them. 17:10, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, fixed the cream and teh eyes. 17:21, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and get rid of the waste. 18:09, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes need to match. It doesn't matter what direction they're coming from, Storm. =.=;;

Reuploaded. Copied stripes to the best of my abilities... 19:50, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all over the image. 19:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and smudge them just a tad..

Reuploaded, blurred stripes and cleared...some waste. I'll get the rest soon. 20:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and there should be some y-stripes in there. 21:00, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

What art program do you use? I can give you a tip that will get rid of all the waste with just a click of a button in GIMP! 00:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I used Pixlr for this but I have GIMP. Thanks, Ivy! 01:48, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ears, added Y stripes and filled in white pixles, comments? 03:23, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad, and make them a tiny bit more rippley - like the leader. Also, they look tintet green... Could you fix that? Also, redden the earpink, erase the waste, and darken the shading a tad. =3 05:12, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm waiting until my sister's computer's out of the shop (Tuesday, around this time) because her GIMP doesn't close on me everytime. I got everything but the waste, whcih I promise to erase tomorrow. 05:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hm... I think I erased it all. Just seeing what I can do before I'm allowed to use GIMP. 14:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I didn't reply sooner :S On your lineart layer, select the region on the outside of the lineart. Keep your selection, then go on the shading layer. Go to the settings at the top. Edit---> clear. It should clear out all waste. Then go to Select---> none. 16:41, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivy =) 17:03, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

ass more stripes and define the shading. 20:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

BAHAHAHHAHAHHZAHAHAHHAHA Ok I'm done xD...BBAHAHAHAHAH Make some of the stripes on the haunch y stripes too. 21:03 Tue Jul 10

There's a little bit of waste under the front left paw. Breeze whisker  01:00, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Add cream paws. 02:20, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I um... aDDed some more stripes, Elo(xD) and made some Y stripes on the haunch, added cream paws, and I think I got all the waste. 15:14, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste, the white pixels are back, and blur the paws. 15:53, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded killed waste/blurred paws changes not showing e.e 16:14, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes more brown...they look reddish imo. 16:30, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

define the shading a tad. 19:00, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the cream on her chest. 16:46, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded/ 19:00, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste above her back. 02:10, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. If you don't want any waste, set the shading layer to multiply. 02:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink ,10:30, July 14,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:32, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly shading and erase the waste. `

Reuploaded 23:05, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the top of the haunch, add more shading on the hind leg, and define the depth in her eye 23:07, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the stripes. 00:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look still a bit reddish, make them more browner. <span style="">02:50, 15, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 02:27, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Y'know what I haven't done in a long time? It has something to do with this picture being really good <3 CBA? 04:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but the stripes seemed more blurred and then less blurred in some areas. Could you fix that. Also, define the "highlights" on the legs, and define the depth of the shading. 15:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

.....Reuploaded v.v 15:39, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-CBA  15:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but can you make the color of the stripes match her other images more? Right now they look kind of dark reddish/brownish. 20:13, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks! Reuploaded. 20:40, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing CBA? 21:32, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry again, but the color of the stripes still don't match. But other than that, this is pretty.<3 07:52, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (Ki) - For Approval
So if Mistystar gets an apprentice for her warrior name announced at a Gathering, Ivytail should get a kit for her apprentice name announced at a Gathering. Kit blanks are too small. Comments? 21:03, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Aww :3 Make her white a little darker. 21:05, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

So cute <3 Can you smudge her ginger a bit more and make it darker and redder? 21:07 Thu Jul 12

I love this <3 Can you blur the patches some? 21:28, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading 13:31, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Re-did the markings. 16:41, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the marking more, and possibly add more/make the markings bigger to match. So cute :D <span style="">07:31, 14, 07, 2012

Enlarge the earpink a smidge. 17:19, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. 02:36, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Skywatcher (Ro) - For Approval
Ahh, Skywatcher, one of my favorite characters <3 Now, the ruff around his neck probably won't stay because I don't think Scarlet wants to tweak her image for that, however, I did give him a sagging belly, it's based off of Hickory's :P I don't know how you guys make fur look so awesome *coughgraystripecough* so if you have any pointers, that'd be phenomenal <3 05:21, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading on the back, and maybe make the scars and tad thinker ignore the scars thing if no one else agrees owo 08:02, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Nah.. You can keep the ruff, I'll see what I can do with the loner. Darken the shading on the head and define th elight on the tail 13:29, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

The scars are fine, Berry. 16:56, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or is their waste near his stomach area? And this is wonderful, but could you blur the back shading a tad? 16:58, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the shading black and the highlights white? This colour doesn't quite match his other images. 18:58, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

No highlights were used ^^; 19:03, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Black shading then? 19:13, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

there's waste under his tail, by his chest, and near his paws. 02:38, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make a couple tuffs of fur stick up from behind his head/ears for the ruff? You don't have to, it's just a personal preference. Breeze whisker  04:27, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

There is fur sticking up behind his ears ^^; Do you want me to define it? 15:03, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 00:57, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

I was think maybe add a couple of tuffs that aren't connected with the head and make a seperate sort of space. It would make it looks like more of the ruff is coming from his neck. Breeze whisker  00:02, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so sorry Breezy, but I'm confused...not connected to the head? How could I make the fluff behind his ear more defined? 04:29, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Larkpaw (Ki) ~ CBA
She gets one for the same reason Ivytail does. I took all the colors from her .xcf for the apprentice image.

Blur the chest shading. 02:15, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

There's a tiny bit of waste under the back paw. 18:07, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the face and the ear-pink a bit more 23:03, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. <span style="">18:21 Sun Jul 15

Re-uploaded. The ear pink is fine.

Can you define the shading on her paws and tail? 20:09, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 19:55, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Crouchpaw (Ki) - CBA
Crouchpaw gets a kit image just like Larkpaw. Oh, and I got the colors from his apprentice image. Comments? 00:12, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Very nice... can you lighten the pelt just a tad and define the shading? I can barely see the lineart. 03:18, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Breeze whisker  04:23, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink then. 06:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back. 16:35, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 18:56, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. 00:27, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:27, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the paws. 17:15, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:21, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bugger and blur it more. <span style="">18:16 Sun Jul 15

The ear pink is fine.

CBA? 20:01, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Called dark gray in The Darkest Hour. Comments? 19:25, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights, define the earpink, define the shading on the paws and tail, and make the highlights smaller. 19:27, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reuploaded 19:48, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. 19:49, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt color a bit. She's too dark.

Define the earpink. 19:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading, it looks blotchy. Also, shouldn't this be Alt2 warrior because her alt warrior is on CBA?20:20, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

No, Moon. That's Bluestar and this is Mistystar. xD 20:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

facepalm* That's why i shouldn't comment when I'm dead tired. XDDD21:33, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is also edging away from the lineart, can you fix that? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:21, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you even out the shading on the paws? It looks like they're darker than the rest of the pelt.

What do you mean, darken the highlights? 18:11, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tone them down... 18:35, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think the changes are showing. 18:37, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and rename the file Mistystar.warrior.alt.png. 18:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know how to rename an image. 18:55, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploded 19:04, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Upload a new image called Mistystar.warrior.alt.png and tag this^ one for deletion. 19:06, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-ish 19:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and define the shading. 19:47, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine. 19:53, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Too late. Reuploaded Ear-pink and shading fixed. 19:59, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and enlarge the earpink and move the shoulder highlight closer to her chest. 20:44, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her tail and lighten her paws a tad; it looks like she has darker legs. 02:35, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Ratscar (Ki) ~ For Approval
He gets a kit, check the talk page. I didn't know if I should put the scar on him so I didn't, but I'll add it if it's needed. Comments? <span style="">02:34 Mon Jul 16

Darken the shading and define the light source. 19:46, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the earpink on the left ear. -.0 19:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (Ki) - For Approval
She gets a kit charart. Eeeee, I haven't uploaded anything for approval in ages. Comments? Breeze whisker  04:08, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Ummm, I had this reserved. owo 04:22, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, I don't mind this is wonderful, blur the chest shading a tiny bit. 04:38, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the flank shading a little 04:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Why does she get a kit image? I see nothing in her history about her appearing in a gathering as a new apprentice like other characters did. She was never even an apprentice at all. And there's no cite on her name in the charcat. Where was she mentioned as a kit? 06:02, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, I just saw the discussion. However I disagree with them getting kit images, but I'll leave that in the discussion. 06:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Whoops. Sorry Ducksplash. I did the Cntl+F thing and only Appledash's resevations for the queen popped up. Looking through the edit history, I can see you did. Go ahead and take it, you need the approved images, if they do get one. Breeze whisker  14:50, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Diesel (Lo) ~ For Approval
Woooo! Anyway, Paleh sent me the .xcf so all the colours are the same (wonder rather not change them) Anyway, comments? 04:17 Tue Jul 17

Darken the shading. Looks nice, Mounty 04:49, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D 05:07 Tue Jul 17

Add a stripe or two to the back leg furthest from us and add a bit of shading too :3. Gorgeous as always, Mounty<3 07:25, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his tummy. 14:30, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Alt. Ro) ~ Declined
For being called plain gray in FQ. Comments? ouo 07:19, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't say solid gray or plain gray, just gray. That's a partial description and doesn't get an alt. Declined. 13:37, July 17, 2012 (UTC)