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Thornclaw (Alt W) - For Evaluation
Pretty sure I'm allowed to reserve this? 04:35, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, you are! Define the shading a lot more and define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 04:38, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:46, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

That's better, but the shading is a little too overblurred on the chest on tail, which makes it lose depth. Perhaps define the shading depth a bit in those places. Curve the shading on the haunch, add shading to << that ear, and erase any eye shading. -- 04:48, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:08, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. -- 05:16, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:09, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading a bit more?  Crystie   You captured  my heart  10:06, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a second shading layer to define the depth? Seems very flat at the moment. 15:22, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you check for any leaking shading and places where it needs smoothing? -- 21:13, November 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:10, November 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and add some light to the front legs. 15:53, November 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:47, November 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading some more, if you need an example on how much you should smooth it, you could try taking a look at some of the approved chararts with a smooth shading style, to give you an idea, so you won't get many or no more comments about smoothing it. Having something to look to as an example can be a tremendous help. The shading is leaking away from the line art on the front of the haunch toward the front leg, and there appears to be some on both of the front legs too. Do you think you can define the light on the tail some just after the bend? It looks like there's some shading there where there should be light. Depending on how you're smoothing the shading, it can leak away from the line art, so I suggest after you smooth it you go around checking and filling in any leaky spots. 15:36, November 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 09:29, November 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some, as it looks quite blotchy at the moment, and it also appears to be leaking away from the lineart along the back. After that, define the depth by adding a secondary layer of shading to areas that would be a bit darker if your source is coming from our right.

Reuploaded 03:02, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference. Leave your shading depth layer a tad sharper and see if that will help. -- 03:03, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think I still see some leaking shading on the back, But im not 100% sure Moo (talk) 20:50, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

^^theres leaking on the back there. Define theshading on the face (and ears too), i can't really see it. 16:22, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:26, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

There still is a lack of shading depth. You need to add an additional layer of shading that is darker or at a higher opacity along the main shading later, but doesn't reach as far along the body as the main shading layer. 18:09, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

Whitewing (W) - For Approval
Welp here we go <3 (Tysm Thunder who kindly gave me my beautiful Whitewing) Moo (talk) 01:27, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add/define the shading depth. -- 01:33, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

some random specks of white are around the image, here

01:44, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 01:59, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Smoothen out the transition between shading depths and define the light on the paws 02:08, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define by adding more shading depth? --Moo (talk) 19:12, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Yes. -- 19:28, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! Will do ty --Moo (talk) 19:49, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looking very nice! add some light to the front legs and a little bit on the back foot closest to us. 15:24, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 20:41, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add light to the back paw, and I recommend adding more light to the front legs and paws to make them look less flat. 02:18, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not really familiar with the shading and sources, Could someone do me a redline please? Moo (talk) 20:32, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

with the source you have, i would erase some of the shading in these spots that i marked. Could you define the shading depth on the tail as well? 21:01, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are you sure about those light patches? Anyway I did them <3 Moo (talk) 20:48, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

There should only be shading depth on one side of the legs, so remove some on << this side. -- 16:49, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

As soon as I get home tomorrow I Will! --Moo (talk) 08:33, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 21:10, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oh my goodness yes sorry Moo (talk) 03:59, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

I'm a bit confused about what Greenflower said, Ok scratch that - REALLY confused. Can I have some help or explanation? Thank you guys <3 Moo (talk) 06:49, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure myself, Millie, but, here's a redline for where you could put/expand some shading depth to help finish this off (what you've got on the tail is fine, that's why I left it :D)

Wolfheart (K) - For Approval
22:31, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly smooth out the neck/facial shading a bit? ​​​

'''reuploaded. 00:18, December 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the haunch shading, too, and smudge the earpink? 17:13, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

While comparing the file histories... it doesn't look like you smoothed out the shading, just moved it a little bit. I still stand by my comment about smoothing out the neck shading. ​​​

Still working? 15:55, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

Whitewing (K) ~ For Evaluation
21:10, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit. -- 23:51, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

recede the shading everywhere. 02:11, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:39, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth layer more. -- 13:49, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? Moo (talk) 20:52, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:05, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading maybe? Looking a little sharp --

06:09, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth more. It appears you are darkening your shading layer, but that doesn't define the depth as much. Create a new layer of shading, make it thinner than your shading layer, and make it much darker than your shading layer. Smooth it out but leave it a tad sharper than your shading layer, that will help the image with flatness. -- 16:48, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Make the shading smoother? --Moo (talk) 08:34, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:34, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, made it a bit better 20:53, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth more + smooth the depth on the haunch. -- 00:29, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I obviously have issues defining the shading 06:16, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add a little bit more shading on both ears? 17:42, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (K) - For Approval
ok 21:18, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

this looks darker than his other images in the set? could you also define the texture a bit too?

reup 02:05, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Can you shade the little chest area poking between the head and foreleg? 04:12, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup

nudge 00:04, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

You're only supposed to ask for comments when five days has gone, which it has not. Regardless, I think the texture can be lighter to match the og set? 03:43, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

reup 16:34, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W)-for evaluation
oof, I will fix this tomorrow, it’s almost midnight-- 05:37, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

I have fixed the file for you, you needed to link it. Remove the black background, this can be done using a wand tool or clicking the delete background button. -- 00:01, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more. 05:11, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Where is the light source? --Moo (talk) 08:34, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is disappearing near the lineart. What I did to fix this was fill the lineart with my shading colour and then blur, so the tool doesn’t blur the shading with the blank space. As for the background, I recommend lowering the opacity of that layer and adding a layer on top with the lineart (full opacity) so you can see where there should be black and where there shouldn’t be. I’m probably not the best for advice though; I’m also only a project kit. --

22:25, December 7, 2019 (UTC) Oof, I think I was seeing the old version (my page didn’t reload). Nvm --

22:42, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

add depth to the shading and there is a corner of waste where the tail bends. this looks very good! 00:56, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the eye color a bit. They're supposed to be sky blue. Smooth out the haunch shading a little while you're at it too. Good job so far, Oceanpelt! -- 01:11, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded (shading, eye color, and waste.-- 03:29, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light on the front legs? 08:58, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is very flat. Try adding a second layer of shading (but only cover like half of what you've originally shaded) to add depth. 23:41, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up (also it looks like the legs are a different color so I will mess around with it tomorrow)-- 03:14, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the shading on the back tail. 21:05, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Still a little dot of waste near the bend of the tail :P --

05:36, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

re-up-- 12:05, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out your shading layers a bit. -- 01:01, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Will re upload soon, GIMP has been acting up. (When I try to select the image to erase white on the inside the eraser doesn’t work)-- 18:55, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - For Approval
03:11, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps recede the white on <-- side of the neck and add some more white to curve on the bottom portion of the <-- shoulder like the kittypet? 17:18, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup

nudge 00:03, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Same thing about Nutwhisker. My comment still stands about removing the white on the <--- side of the neck. 03:46, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

reup 16:34, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

Wasptail (W) ~ For Approval
I couldn't tell if there was texture on the apprentice or just the design of the stripes, so I left it as is.

16:02, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like there is a LITTLE texture on the apprentice, but I had to look very close to see it so I would say it’s fine-- 03:05, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Looking at the old warrior and apprentice, I think there's some faint highlights on it and the stripes look a tiny bit smudgier? The earpink looks a bit dark compared to her other images too, is that shading? could you erase some of it, if it is? The shading you have looks good, and this is only a suggestion that you don't have to do, but perhaps try a warmer shading tint? you could try red, I think that would look nice. Again, you don't have to if you'd rather keep the tint you have. 21:25, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Spider Paw (Alt. W) - For Approval
07:21, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes green to match the set? Nicely done! 17:18, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks vec :) 17:33, December 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you give a bit more shape to the shading, especially the haunch? I also think it might be leaking on the haunch, speaking of. ​​​​​

Define the shading depth on the haunch triangle/belly triangle thing. -- 00:30, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Woollytail (W) ~ For Approval
way down  hadestown    |undefined    17:27, 12/08/2019 ​  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    17:27, 12/08/2019 ​  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    17:27, 12/08/2019 ​

Per the tunneler, he needs white on his back legs. -- 17:33, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also smooth the foreleg shading too? 19:16, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-up  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    01:50, 12/10/2019 ​  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    01:50, 12/10/2019 ​  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    01:50, 12/10/2019 ​

I still think the <--- foreleg's shading could be smoothed a bit more. 03:47, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Yarrowleaf (W) - CBA
something looks kind of off about it. May fiddle with the facial shading or pupils later. 16:38, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

reup 21:01, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think the pale parts on the back leg should be receded a bit? This is super good! ^^ 03:51, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

reup thank you! 18:56, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:51, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

Wrenflight (W) - For Approval
-- 00:33, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Might you define the light in the ears and/or the ear pink? I can't see anything at all. ​​​​​

Reuploaded -- 23:41, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

The texture appears slightly smudgier and softer. I think the pattern and style brush stroke wise you have works really well, though. Also, can you define the shading depth? I'm not really making it out. 03:53, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used a 3px smudge tool on the "hard pressure" setting. -- 23:40, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the edges of the shading; this is looking fairly hard-edged. ​​

Reuploaded -- 23:44, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

Whiteberry (W) ~ CBA
way down hadestown, way down under the ground  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    01:40, 12/10/2019 ​  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    01:40, 12/10/2019 ​

Could you define the eye depth a bit? Nicely done, Star! -- 01:55, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

re-up thank you! way down  hadestown    |undefined    01:36, 12/11/2019 ​  way  down  hadestown    |undefined    01:36, 12/11/2019 ​

CBA? 02:52, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

Violet Dawn (W) ~ For Approval
03:48, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

The texture on her other images looks darker than on this. 15:54, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

reup tried to make it darker, but its already pretty dark along side her other images 00:02, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Rocky (W) ~ CBA
03:02, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe remove some of the shading on the tip of the tail? If the light is coming from the right, the right face of the tail should be in the light. 18:09, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 18:54, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:43, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

Windflight (K) ~ CBA
03:02, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:43, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

Stormheart (K) - For Approval
16:33, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Redclaw (W alt) - For Approval
20:05, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

I know the original was a tabby, but I really think this shouldn't have stripes. He's not described as tabby, either for this mistake or normally, and tawny is a shade of brown, which has never been a color you're supposed to/are allowed to add stripes to like ginger cats, as far as I know. 23:41, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Tawny is also orange-brown, not just brown. I feel in this case we should be matching what was already there. Tawny cats have been allowed to have stripes added to them, it's been like that for quite a while now. ​

Windflight (W) ~ For Approval
21:10, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

Wrenflight (K) - For Approval
Will fix the eyes in a moment. -- 01:48, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:49, December 14, 2019 (UTC)