Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Harrykit - Silver Nomination
Ok so this is my first nomanation so if this takes a long time..... well then i guess i fail XD anyways any comments? ♪ ★Hollycloud♪ ★ 17:18, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

His history could be a little more detailed. 20:37, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title. Expand The Rescue. 20:44, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well I couldnt find anything else unless I missed a few pages... I am known to do that well, appearntly to my english teacher... I a missed a few 5 pages on my book report XD ♪ ★Hollycloud♪ ★ 05:20, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add a quote. 00:49, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if you think this is necessary, but at the very beginning, where it says, "Harrykit was born to Leafstar and Billystorm", do you think, since he wasn't named at the time, you should just say, "He was born to Leafstar and Billystorm"? Optional, but I wanted to suggest that anyway. Oh, and there's a typo at the end, "Skyclan". It looks good so far. 20:22, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the typo, you guys do know you can fix the little typo's.  21:41 Sun Nov 20

Ok i fixed it sorry im not signed in right now but im really busy! HOLLYCLOUD 22:20, 14 November 2011

There still isn't any quotes. 00:20, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Falcon Swoop - Silver Nomination
Comments? 15:31, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

See the part that's in parenthesis? Could you either remove those and make it flow with the article, or just get rid of the statement altogether? Also, could you extend Sign of the Moon at all? 15:34, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any quotes that could be used? 22:48, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Its been a week. Are you still working on this? 23:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

If she isn't, may I take over? 22:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

We'll give her 2 weeks in all, so if she doesn't comment by the end of this week, feel free to take over. 22:59, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I added two quotes. For some reason, I can't find where she's mentioned in SotM. 16:43, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Frogleap ~ Silver Nomination
ok so any comments for me to do on Frogleap??? i just started soo please dont get mad at me  Dew  st  ar  Don't judge me!   21:26, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

We don't nominate for Bronze rank here. You can upgrade it to Bronze when you feel it's good enough, then nominate it for silver when the article looks well thought out and has all the information you can fit in it. 21:35, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Argh, edit conflicts. ;) So, is Dewstar allowed to nominate this? I always thought you could just nominate for silver even if they were below bronze. 21:36, November 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I wouldn't know. I would think so, since Bronze is a rank that anyone can give a character. 21:38, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Dewstar can nominate this for silver but not for bronze. You can give any character the status of being bronze. Dewstar, I suggest you look at the FAQ if you have any questions or look at guidelines Moonflight is drafting. 22:47, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

This will be archived due to comment above. 23:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys i was tired  Dew  st  ar  PEACE   00:29, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ok then, Crookedstar's Promise needs major expansion/detailing and more quotes should be found. :3 00:31, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Man Sweetflower i need to borrow that book again Im just kidding i could probably find something tear tear  Dew  st  ar  PEACE   00:36, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the Crookedstar's promise history please check it out and tell me if i need to change anything! Dew st  ar  PEACE   01:47, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed some of it. 02:00 Wed Nov 30

Ok Sweetflower :3

Anything else you want me to do like add the Quotes? -- 02:29, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Quotes please. 22:09 Wed Nov 30

I already added 3 -- 22:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a better quote than: "It can't be!" It dosn't quite describe his personality much. 00:16 Fri Dec 2

Already did that :3 Ok um Atelda do you have anything to say about Frogleap like expand history or what? Sweetflower anything else? -- 12:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Dewstar, please don't comment like that again. But you can expand CP more. I think he is mentoined more than that. 23:15 Mon Dec 5

He is. Somewhere near the end. Do you have the book? 23:26, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Im only using Google books guys please take it easy on me 00:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's the same thing as using a real book, but it's better. And what do you mean go "easy on me?" It's your job to expand what we tell you to do. That's what you nominated him for. To make his article better ;) 13:19 Sat Dec 10

Are you still working on this Dew? 01:10 Mon Dec 12

Dawnstripe ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 01:46 Wed Nov 30 Can you expand her history in Crookedstar's promise please! Dew st  ar  PEACE   01:48, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Not really, she only appears once. 01:53 Wed Nov 30

Oh :'( sorry i just thought that she would appear more than once  Dew  st  ar  PEACE   01:55, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok? 02:00 Wed Nov 30

Is there anything else you can do like quotes?? or Family tree?? -- 02:13, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Possilbe quotes. Not the famliy tree though. 18:12 Wed Nov 30

Ok then :3 sorry for making mistakes i am trying to be better -- 18:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, but there is no point on sauing your sorry and stuff on a nomination, you could put that on my talk page. :P 22:08 Wed Nov 30

I'm sure you can find a few quotes; probably from BP, CP, or BotC. She says some pretty good things to describe her. 00:54, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try, but I'd have to read the books again, and I currently don't on BotC and I can't use google books or stuff like that. 01:16 Fri Dec 2

I actually can use google books. xD I added a main quote, and she doens't say anything else. 23:43 Sun Dec 11

Frecklewish ~ Silver Nomination
Frecklewish

Any comments??

Is there any mention of her in Beyond the Code. Can you also find any quotes that truly represent her personality as the three in the quote section are just narrating a scene. 23:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ill try Atelda :3 i like her name 00:34, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sweetflower ^_^ -- 22:17, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Find a reference for the description. 00:52, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Expand SkyClan's Destiny a bit more please. 01:14 Fri Dec 2

Ok so anyways i just expanded the Skyclans destiny Sweetflower and reference so like description in one of the books 23:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but expand it a bit more Dewstar. A reference to the description, you know what her description is? The part where she's called "leggy". 23:10 Mon Dec 5

I found the cite, and I'll add it in ;) <span style="">22:13 Wed Dec 7

Fixed the Nomination title. <span style="">23:17 Thu Dec 8

Falling Rain ~ Silver Nomination
The page looks fine and as expanded as possible, and the only quote about him doesn't describe his personality, so..comments? 23:39, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

What's the quote? Something is better than nothing, if you ask me. 23:43, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Added. 00:13, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

My preference but the ending sounds like a bad way to end. Just my preference. 23:27, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I can't change it, because he's too minor of a character to end any other way. 23:38, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 17:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 00:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lilykit ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded it by 2 paragraphs, and added the quote. 00:32, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find any quotes about her? Other than the main one? <span style="">00:51 Fri Dec 2

None that have anything to do with her... 00:52, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 17:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 00:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 23:37, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar's Quest, The Darkest Hour, The Sight, Outcast, Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon need to be expanded. 23:45, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Don't forget The Forgotten Warrior either. :3 23:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

It might take a little while :P and I can't do to much about TFW because I'm still reading it Dx 23:50, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I did my best whitch is fail Dx doing my best though :P 00:10, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

If you need any help just give me a shout. <span style="">00:17 Tue Dec 6 ..... Please? I'm having some troubles... 01:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure what do you need help with? <span style="">00:05 Wed Dec 7 Well almost everything but I will still be doing my best 23:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, any book you need help expanding? <span style="">23:28 Thu Dec 8

Everything ;-; 04:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded Firestar's Quest. <span style="">00:01 Mon Dec 12

I'm sorry, but I'm opposed to Sweetflower helping you out with everything. This is your nomination, Sandstorm. You should be able to expand this article mostly by yourself. I understand if someone doesn't have this certain book or what not, but every single book seems way too extreme. I suggest "withdrawing" this nomination and start with a more minor character. 00:04, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Or you could use google books, or something like it. BUt other than that, I suggets withdrawing it like Atelda said, there are plenty of minor character articles you could work on, before you get into more important characters. If you look at my userpage where my PC votes are, you'll see the majority of nominations are minor characters. :3 'Casue they're easy. But once you get comfortable with stuff, than I started trying more important characters. Just a suggestion though! <span style="">01:07 Mon Dec 12

Seedkit ~ Silver Nomination
I added everything that was on Lilykit's page, and tweaked it a bit. xD Comments? 23:38, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Is there anything you can do with the very last sentence of the article. Like, (sorry, brainfart here) any details when Jayfeather gets back. It's fine if you can't. =) 23:51, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Done. :3 Thats the best I can do, though. 00:18, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 17:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 00:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Molepaw (OTS) ~ Silver nomination
I know, needs improvements, but I am willing to nominate him for silver status, comments? 04:13, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Expand NIght Whispers. <span style="">01:30 Thu Dec 8

In the Forgotten Warrior, can you possibly add in when Jayfeather goes into Molepaw's mind and sees the fox moment, and describe the moment? 04:49, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also add in a better main quote, and add some to the bottom? 04:50, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I shall be back!
I'm not typing it all out. If you're in PB and/or PCA, you'll already know. Anyways, I gotta run away for a while, so... I'll be back later! This isn't something I choose to do, so... I'll try and get on when I can. =/ 16:33, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnbright ~ Silver Nomination
I'm obsessed with the prefix - " Dawn". Comments? (I'll add quotes tomorrow) <span style="">23:06 Sat Dec 10

The article needs major expanding. The quote the article has in the "Quotes" section needs a page number and a description and I'm pretty sure there are other/better quotes that could be used. 23:23, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I added quotes, and those are literally the only quotes I could use. I'm expanding now. <span style="">01:40 Sun Dec 11

Expanded. <span style="">21:12 Sun Dec 11

Russetfur ~ Silver Nomination
She always was one of my favourites. Comments? <span style="">23:13 Sat Dec 10

This article needs a profuse amount of work and I'm inclined to think it as a reservation. Basically all of the history needs to be expanded and detailed, the main quote needs to be replaced as does the other quotes. And looking at some of the sections, the writing is extremely choppy. 23:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

(This is just for reference) I expanded Fire and Ice, Moonrise, Dawn, The Fourth Apprentice, and Sunset. (All the ones that I list are expanded to the max.) <span style="">01:57 Sun Dec 11


 * Fire and Ice
 * Moonrise
 * Dawn
 * Starlight
 * Sunset
 * The Fourth Apprentice
 * The Sight

Done expanding and deatailing. If there is a certain section you think still needs work, just tell me. I'm going ot get more quotes now. <span style="">20:53 Sun Dec 11

Fading Echoes could be expanded at the end of the last paragraph I believe. Anyways, nice work Sweet! 23:45, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll work on that now. <span style="">23:51 Sun Dec 11

Done. <span style="">00:10 Mon Dec 12

Petaldust - Silver Nomination
I've expanded her article and I'll add quotes. Comments? 22:32, December 11, 2011 (UTC)