Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 52

Ruby (Lo) ~ Declined
Alright, there she is...anyone like? comments please! Thanks

Tiger heart  ♥  01:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading, make sure the ear-pink fill the ear capacity, and erase the pink that's spilling from the lineart 01:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less hotpink, make it the same as her kit charart. 01:44 Sun Feb 5

Sure I'll reupload it in a second Tiger heart  ♥  01:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Tiger heart  ♥  01:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is still not 50% complete. Suggesting for deletion again. Get this to at least 50% completiong before uploading this again. 02:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, I suggest you look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement and blurring  02:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Thank you -- Tiger heart  ♥  02:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and I looked at the tutorials (thanks, Ivy) Tiger  heart  ♥  02:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading and fix the pixels on the paws, fill 'em in. 03:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay; Re-uploaded --☯ Tiger heart  ♥  03:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) It looks like some of the lineart on the legs and belly are blurred, possibly erase the extra pixels around it.
 * 2) Make the earpink the same colour and smudge it.
 * 3) Fill in the grey pixels on her feet and tail.
 * 4) Blur the shading LOTS . 05:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Er. Instead of the file archive, could you post the actual image? 05:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Redone -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't upload a new file each time you change it. Re-upload it over File:Ruby.loner.png. 05:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to blur the shading tons. Try using guassion blur under filters. There are also white pixels on the front paw closest to us. 08:26, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

You also still need to post the actual image, no the archive of it. And I don't think this is 80% complete, so you have a week to improve it before it's declined I believe. 08:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There are light pixels on the front paw, shadings are only applied not blurred, blurred lineart, some colours (ear-pink) are on the places where they can't be- this is all things they are wrong.. fix that 11:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sp... I can't upload the new one I did for a week? :( I fixed the pixels on the paw... hm... Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:26, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You can upload it. What Paleh means is, the charart/image doesn't look 80% complete. You have a week to make it look 80% complete. Constructivly, post the file, not the archive. 23:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:37, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So if I upload it again, will it get declined? If it's not perfect (by people's standards) Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  02:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind. Misunderstood it. Re-uploaded -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

... =_= Use the female lineart, not the male. 02:58, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons still. i can help you if you wish. Also smudge the pelt into the earpink. 06:14, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Redone... still need to do something about the shading, I believe, but I fixed the pixels, used the female blank, and blended the earpink -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --❦ Woo  patch of green  273  04:14, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to be lightened up a lot. Sky Fus Roh Dah  08:48, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Redone once again, and lightened *wink wink* ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  22:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. If I could, I'd change the heading to "For Approval", because it looks way better than it did the first time. 00:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart I reserved this a week ago-- 00:46, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Acorn, you already have Birdpaw up, and you can have one up for approval at a time. 00:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blurring the earpink... Thanks Moon! Thanks! ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  01:45, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks some of her tail got cut off, but it might just be me. :3 18:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, Tigerheart, I mentioned if I could change the heading, and it doesn't mean you can change the heading. Only a senior warrior and above can do that if they feel the image is at least 80% complete. 20:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry... *embarrassed* I'm really sorry. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:13, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading on the body. ^^ Sky To kill an Empire... 23:12, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded... You can barely see the changes I made but they're there... lawl. Woo patch of green  ❦  03:14, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please stop thumbing your image. All you need to say is "re-uploaded" when you upload the file. xD 03:16, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

okay sorry. It won't happen again... is this 80% by any Senior Warrior's standards? I would like to do another and I have the day off from school today, so I have a lot of time to do a charart. How long do I have to wait until someone can approve this? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Has there been any comments besides mine in the past 12 hours? Woo patch of green  ❦  17:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Be patient. There's blurred lineart on her back leg. 21:53, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll fix that Woo  patch of green  ❦  22:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  00:12, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stop changing the file to a url. And she's light grey, not dark. Just follow the apprentice tutorials and try to match the other images as closely as possible. 00:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  00:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the face and blur the shading. Sky To Kill An Empire  08:30, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the kit image. The kittypet is too dark and should be tweaked. 15:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded and lightened the shading... a lot. ♥ V-day  I want sugar ♥    22:39, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Woo, stop thumbing it. Just leave the file code alone, it'll update on its own. 22:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I will. Can I ask a question? What does Under Evaluation mean? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:40, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, it means that the image you put up is under evaluation by the project. If you post an image that is over 80% (I think) finished then you get to put the heading "For Approval" and you get promoted to an apprentice!! I hope I helped...and blur the "highlights." 21:45, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for telling me, and am an apprentice. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:17, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 04:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  04:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Un-thumbed. Define the shading on the face and blur the earpink. 05:08, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the body shading. c: Sky To Kill An Empire  06:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  15:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the lineart near the earpink, also define the belly shading. 23:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:03, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the head shading. 14:11, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart in the ear, waste under the tail, and a misplaced black pixle on her leg (I think). Also, please define the haunch and shoulder shading and lighten the shading on the face a bunch.  ~Pouncey!  "Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" "No..."  x3 17:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:03, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darn, it's not showing the new version I did. ! Woo patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪  00:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading. And please stop putting the image in a thumbnail. Right before it says "overwrite file," there's another section that says "Thumbnail" or "Fill image" (something like that). And click full image. 00:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  03:39, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind. Reuploaded again, there were black pixels on the paws Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  03:41, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the base of her tail. 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded you can't see it very well though Woo  patch of green  ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦  04:25, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. If I'm correct you've already had a week to get it up to 80%+ complete right? Unless someone hasn't updated the heading. 05:47, Mon, Feb, 20, 2012

I know I'm not part of the project, but I wanted to give you some critique. Could you possibly define the shading and blur it? 05:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Yes, I do think I've had over a week... does that mean it's declined? :( Lalala... you say  I am messing with your head, yeah yeah... ♪ ♪  20:22, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'd think so...but this is at least 80% by MY standards. I say it stays up. 20:25, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you! Happy Clover Day  ♣  21:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tail shading was too dark Happy Clover  Day  ♣  05:49, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is 80% There is some blurred haunch lineart, can you fix that? 04:09, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sure I can; thank you... so much! Thank you all! Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 06:17, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 06:17, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job apprentice. :3 07:30, 22, 02, 2012

Umm, Isn't WooWoo been an apprentice already? 00:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 02:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC) Nah, I'm still a 'paw. Thanks everyone! Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 02:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 07:17, 23, 02, 2012

There's blurred lineart in the ear, shoulder, neck, both back legs, tail, front leg, and along her back. ☾ ~Pouncey~ ☽  14:59, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 02:53, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

BLur the shaind, and smudge the earpink into the ear. Is there blurred lineart in the ear? I can't see it exactly, but it looks like there is. If there is, get rid of it. C: -- Fenris  They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 14:00, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded there was no blurred lineart  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 22:18, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and define your shading placement, look here for an idea on how it should look like. <span style="">23:56, 24, 02, 2012

Whoo... thanks! Sorry I couldn't fix it earlier. Swim meet. Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 01:54, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 01:55, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 02:01, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 02:31, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Try using Guassion blur on the shading layer/on the shading, it's under Filters. <span style="">09:21, 28, 02, 2012

Woo, just a notice: you have 4 days to get this approved before it reaches the four week time limit. I advise doing a quick recap of the apprentice tutorials and paying close attention to the parts about shading. You're almost there, you just gotta get it smoothed out! ^^ 17:30, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks shelly! Thanks all of you! Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 22:24, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the 'highlights' more. 20:55, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more. <span style="">00:43, 03, 03, 2012

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 02:54, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. If you're using the Gaussian Blur tool, make sure it's on a good rate, not a low one. :3 18:11, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And just if you didn't know, something happened to my paint.net thing D: it just completely wacked out on me and stopped working altogether, so for till I get it fixed, I'm using pixlr. :3. Better than nothin'. Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 23:10, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, you really need to blur the shading..it's very blotchy. 00:46, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 04:13, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, baddish ear shading =_=  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 04:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the "highlights". ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:21, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tone them down? Okay... Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 03:02, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded `  Clover day   Woo ♣♣ 03:02, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Woo. It's been one month since you've put this up for approval. I have to decline this. 03:07, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 03:08, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I'll archive this section and just post it under a new heading when I finish. 03:12, March 5, 2012 (UTC)