Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=For Approval= Take it to the approval page

=Tweaking=

Hussar (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Rainfacestar and DJAngelCandy. Tweaked for flat shading and the scar 08:37, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you please lighten the shading? 11:24, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:00, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

sharpen the scar, it looks like a weird streak of pink paint. HotTeacher69 (talk) 18:26, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit.

Re-uploaded Best I could do about the scar. Any tips would be appreciated. 03:37, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and the scar still looks kinda off...Define it, maybe? 22:51, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Redone
OA is Bbun. If she wants it I'll drop this. Biased views these days suck. 12:18, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

"Biased views these days suck." Um, what? I fail to see how that comment has anything to do with the charart. Also, lighten the shading a bit and please crop the image so there's not so much dang waste on <-- side of the charart. It's a huge pet peeve of mine.

You also used the short haired blank 13:19, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lol where did the rule of all comments 100% related to art come from. 13:34, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. Also, why are you being hostile when I was just asking what the comment was for?? =/

Re-uploaded sorry 13:42, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Move the ear hair more inside of the ear. These images should show a little bit of the hood/back/whatever you want to call it of the ear, and it looks odd and out of place the way it is now...add some shading to it. 13:49 Thu Sep 10

Re-uploaded Is this what you meant? 13:56, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Are you actually lightening the shading like I've asked?? I don't see any difference in the file history at all.

His chest on the apprentice isn't smudged. 18:49, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

The light paws are leaking onto the tail. 20:20, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I did lighten it- and shit the file won;t open so i did my very best to fix things stupid macbook gimp 13:52, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Hrm, I'm not seeing a difference still... it could be Wikia not showing image changes again, hence why I asked. Could you upload to ezimba or another file uploader if you can access them?

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=1zxvequ&s=8 In the last few reuploads I lowered the shading opacity by at least about 10%, but now I don't have the file anymore, so i /tried/, but... 14:07, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

"Biased views these days suck" yea. I think I see a line inbetween his tail? Probably because of the short hair blank or smth if you know what I'm talking about

It looks like his paw markings were carried over from the warrior blank or something? They are partially inside the tail. 13:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hi, keep all comments about the art and art alone, Bramble. That's been a rule in PCA long before many of the active members joined. I don't care if you think some of the views suck or anything- all comments are to be about the art. If there are issues, bring them up elsewhere, not here.

Re-uploaded oops 12:34, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Why are the pale parts still smudged? Or appear to be? They should not be smudged at all. 12:47 Sun Sep 13

It's mainly the shading- I did smudge the pale parts a little, but only to an extent where they look like they are blurred. like i said, i don't have the file anymore... So I'm not sure what i can do to if they need to be blurred more but idk. 13:19, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file burnt? 22:51, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Foxclaw (W) - Redone
OA is Honeyfur, with a redo (two of them) by Jenrock. Removed stripes as they were wrongfully added. Russet is red-brown, not a shade of ginger. In case it's not obvious, this is close to Pinestar's shade, due to this being my favorite color to shade. 8D

I'm seriously loving that colour too! XD can you define the shading around the belly? 22:43, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Bramblestar (L) - Redone
OA was shelly. This was an interesting distraction from physics homework. 19:18, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the pale part a bit more? 20:22, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

I was an OA too, thanks. You're suppsed to list everyone. =\

Smudge the ear pink, define the light on the legs. 01:42, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 18:04, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest a lot to match the others please. and also is it just me, or do the stripes not really darken at all with the shading? They stay the same color throughout the shading... and maybe define the light on the legs and ...overall some more? 23:51, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

whoops, and add the pale part under the tail please 23:52, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

The pale chest on the others isnt smudged. At least, not on the apprentice which was approved before the others. The stripes are like...a shade lighter than black so I don't know what you're talking about. 23:55, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you at least smudge it some? And make the scar blend a bit more please 23:58, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

If it's not smudged on the apprentice, that is the image to match. She is not required to smudge it.

Re-uploaded: I am so sorry for the damage I did to a once beautiful image. 00:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Uhhh....now there's white on his legs? And can you lessen the pale on the tail please 00:45, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Not sure if the changes are showing. 00:47, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

If they are, I think you should smudge or blur the ear pink more. 03:32, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 14:39, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and give the ear pink a little smudge/blur. 12:18, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:25, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) ~ Withdrawn
OA's were Ashshadow, Stoneclaw, and Stealthfire 00:37, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. 00:39, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

reups 00:44, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it more on the paws and midriff. Also, add shading to where I showed stealth last time. 00:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

ill reup later, but idk where that is -.- 01:01, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

It's the standard and default source for the warriors - aka the one I use the most. As it is now, it goes up way too high on the muzzle and should be on the neck.

Also define the earpink please. 22:52, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reups just saying now (and I'm not throwing its fine into it) but I looked up on the archives where you showed the previous tweaker to add shading, and it does not need shading there. In all anatomical aspects, that part should be in light. 22:59, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

that doesn't stop the shading from reaching up to the muzzle. like cloudy said, it should remain on the neck. 23:02 Sun Sep 13

I'm sorry, but what? The muzzle is the area that should have the light. Please tweak it, because if the light's hitting the face, why would the muzzle have shadow? It makes much more sense for the neck to have the shadow and it doesn't look like any source we have and that's part of the reason it was nominated to begin with.

Like I was trying to say before you added your comment before I could publish mine, Skye, was that the comment before, was directed at Icy. I removed some shading on top of the muzzle, if you could look at the file difference. The shading on the bottom of the muzzle, the bottom should have shading, as my source is plainly above and in <== that direction, so 23:07, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

I did look at the file history, thanks, and I can't see much of a difference, but alright. Can you lighten the shading? It looks much too dark as it is.

reups 23:17, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is still too high on the muzzle. Tone it down please. 23:21, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

no it isn't. you're the one who taught me this source anyway .-. and besides, that's a gradient for the transition from shading to light. It's very real in 3d pictures 23:26, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

And what happens when I agree with Icy? I still think the shading is too high up on the muzzle. Please fix it and I still think the shading is too dark..

I don't remember teaching you putting it so high up...I'm asking you to fix it as well. 23:29, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

in all honestly, the shading is plenty fine. I've seen many a picture like this, Ferncloud as example, and Flowerpaw as well. this is what happens when a realism artist joins a wiki -.- no one listens to me ;-;   23:33, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's no need to agitated about this matter. when a user tells you to fix something, you fix something. you can raise an opinion, but when multiple users comment about the same issue, it would be in the best interest to change it. so instead of getting all mad about an issue, just fix it, and drop it. even though this is withdrawn, i just thought i should say this. 23:42 Sun Sep 13

Stormtail (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA and tweaker is Ducksplash. Tweaked to darken. 01:27, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink? 00:14, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink is the same colour of the warrior's, actually a little lighter I think and honestly, I do believe it's easy to see. idk if someone else agrees with you then I'll change it, but the warrior's ear pink will probably need changing if that happens. 05:51, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe blur or smudge it then? 11:50, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

blur shading 12:04, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload This isn't the original file so I cannot really do that stuff. I just blurred the highlights I'm using the lighten the shading (it turned really dark) idk if other people think I need to make these changes I'll nominate a redo, since I don't think Ducksplash is still around. 20:38, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Duck isn't around, nor would he give out his files if he was. You'll need to make do with what you've got, sorry.

Smooth out the body shading a bit more. 22:49 Sun Sep 13

Define the light on the chest 23:00, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is Mount Everest. Tweaked for flat shading. 01:27, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a bit, please 03:32, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:27, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

The chest shading looks a bit odd... It doesn't flow well w/ the body. Could you maybe curve it a little so the chest doesn't look like a rectangle? 02:07, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 06:13, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the chest some more? 22:52, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Redtail (Alt Star) - Redone
OA is Scarlet, redone to remove stripes.

Blur the tail shading. 22:53, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Lighten the shading at the very base of the tail, and idk but I don't think ==> that paw should have light on the very far side of it by the chest 23:01, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I've lightened the shading a bit, but I've added that tiny bit of light on all of my StarClan cats before. ( note, this is not an invitation to nominate my images- just in case someone gets any ideas. ) It's very much acceptable, since it looks flat without it.

Bramblestar (W) - Redone
OA is sandy. All colors and pattern from leader and apprentice. 19:43, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

By the way I'm well aware the ear pink looks odd af. I'll fix that in the next upload. 19:43, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

also the other OAs were beebs and mounty, I think. 22:40, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, tail, and head, as well as blur/smudge the pale parts please 23:03, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:  please stop asking me to smudge the pale parts. they're not smudged on his apprentice and thats the one i'm matching. 23:11, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Um I said blur/smudge, so you could do either, it looks too uniform. I've told you this before .-. And define the light on the front legs please 23:15, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

<.< is that a scar under the tabby stripes? If so can you move it above the stripe layer please 23:17, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I'm not really sure what your attitude towards me is for, but alright. 23:20, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

There is no need for the <.<, Winter. Please refrain from hostile conduct on PCA's pages. If you have issues, take them elsewhere, thank you.

... .-. i wasn't having an attitude. wow. the <.< was peering eyes thanks :/ but anyway, dont forget the pale part under the tail 23:24, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

That is not what <.< means. It's used as an annoyed face by many people here, so please find something else to use, or don't use one at all. It sure seemed like an attitude, and I'm asking you as the leader of the project to tone it down. =/

Re-uploaded: Thank you cloudy c:. Also I always seem to forget the pale tail...I also think there might be waste, but it could also be my computer screen. 23:28, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

There is. It's at about the middle of the tail on --> side... at maybe six or so pixels out.

Re-uploaded: 10:39, September 14, 2015 (UTC)