Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 32

Moonflower(q)-for approval
queens don't have a transparent background and I don't know how to get it to be so...can anyone help?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 21:33, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes look... scary. Look at Icethroat's tutorials to see how to do the eyes. -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 21:36, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

I've turned it transparent for you. Very nice tabby stripes, by the way. Fix the eyes, and it should be good. Very good job. -- Tinsel claw  21:55, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded...and thanks bramble-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 22:01, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes still look odd, maybe use strait black for pupils? I can't see them. ~  MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:03, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Ohp, never mind about the can't see them. Maybe make them thicker though? ~  MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:07, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

It's nice, but what's with her eyes? She looks cross-eyed--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:29, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Check one of Icethroat21's eye diagrams.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:11, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, but there are different way to do a queen's eye. Look at Lilyfur, Cloudberry, or Splashnose--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:14, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I would maybe lighten up on the stripes a little, they're very close together. And it doesn't say black stripes, just that she has darker stripes. But the shading and highlights are very nice--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:14, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I'm inclined to disagree with you on the stripes Nightfall: I thnk they look great, not too close at all. If you look at a picture of a silver tabby with darker stripes then the stripes are generally this dark (eg a silver bengal - I cannot be bothered to find a picture right now, sorry ! ^_^ I will if you really need me to, but just google it or something). I would advise you don't change them Bracken, but then that's just my opinion. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:24, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded is this okay?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:37, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

It's perfect Bracken. I've just engraved a picture of Moonflower the way I think she looks into my mind, so don't bother with my comment about the stripes. And the eye looks ten million times better! Good job!--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:34, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? (Also wanted to apologise for my leaving the images that have reached 24 hours for now; I just don't have time to fiddle around with all the different places different things need to go right now. Sorry Bramble and the other senior warriors, I feel lazy leaving them but that's life ^_^) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 21:41, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Pssh, not a problem. You do enough without having to worry about that. :) -- Tinsel claw  03:28, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Tinsel claw  22:18, December 16, 2009 (UTC)