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Half Moon (Healer) ~ For Approval
this is not my best work but white cats are hard :/ Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:51, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and define the facial shading. ​​​​​

Lighten the chest so it stays consistent with your light source (it looks like it's coming from in front of her head?)  HA WK FI RE98  21:21, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

The tint looks a bit neon, but it might just be my laptop. Warriorct (talk) 20:54, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is tinted and various other images across the wiki have used almost the exact same coloring. I believe blue is being used here, and it helps prevent the image from looking extremely gray. ​​​

Re-Ups, yes it is blue. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 21:38, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the areas where you removed shading (you can easily see where you erased - like sharp lines in the shading). And there's leaking shading on the hind leg furthest from us. And define the light on all the limbs/paws with the exception of the front leg furthest from us. 22:33, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

There's a lot of erasure marks on the haunches and tail - just figure I give you a reference of where it is. 00:18, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Those aren't erasure marks, they're suppose to be there. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 00:57, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

The marks on the hind leg and end of the spine don't look like they're supposed to be there. They are squiggly (for lack of a better word) and don't match any other color/highlight on the image.  HA WK FI RE98  01:00, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

That's how I smudged my shading, not erasure marks. The only erase marks is on the tail and thats just the hard edge of the shading. I used this type of shading on Shattered Ice as well. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 01:11, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth them out then, they look very sharp and harsh Malina457 (talk) 03:17, September 19, 2018 (UTC)malina

It kind of looks like there's a brush tool used here to add white? Regardless, I'm going to add on to the majority here and say that it needs to be smoothed out a lot, since it stands out way too much and they do look like erasure marks.

Re-Ups; I removed the erasure marks; I don't think I forgot anything else. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 09:04, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

I really like this. Comments before approval? 08:29, September 22, 2018 (UTC)

Could you fix the leaking shading on the hind leg furthest from us? And define the light source just a bit on all of the lower limbs (so elbows down)? 16:37, September 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 01:58, September 25, 2018 (UTC)

There appears to be some really apparent highlight lines on the shoulder area.  HA WK FI RE98  02:59, September 25, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the areas Hawkey mentioned, and define the shading on the head. 22:03, September 25, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 05:11, September 26, 2018 (UTC)

I'm still seeing the lines that Hawkey noticed in her last comment. Could you smooth them out a little more? ​​

There is also leaking shading on the stomach, shoulder hump, and all the legs closest to us. 17:10, September 27, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  20:29, September 28, 2018 (UTC)

Storm Pelt (Hunter) - For Approval
I had so much fun doing this one! ^^  HA WK FI RE98  17:32, September 23, 2018 (UTC)

There's what appears to be blurred lineart on the shoulder and head. ​​​​​​​

'''Reuploaded. ''' HA WK FI RE98  20:37, September 23, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge/distort the large darker spots a bit more like the warrior. 22:05, September 25, 2018 (UTC)

I based the spots more off of the early settler image, since it came before the warrior. ^^  HA WK FI RE98  23:20, September 25, 2018 (UTC)

But the warrior shows the side that you're working with, whereas the early settler does not. ​​​

I tried changing the spots to look like the warrior's and it just looked like a whole mess. To be honest, the spot style on all three of his images look totally different from one another. It was confusing deciding which style to imitate, since previous discussions on this topic suggest that the artist should try to copy the earliest images of the set.  HA WK FI RE98  21:52, September 26, 2018 (UTC)

For now, though, you are required to match the warrior, as that shows the side you are currently working on. If the nomination passes, then you can alter this, but until then, the comment still stands. While the kit is the earliest image, it does not show the side of the image you're working with, hence why the ES and the warrior look slightly different. Patterns are not required to be symmetrical, meaning that both the ES and the warrior images are allowed to have some creative freedom, provided they match the base of the kit, which they do. That being said, please continue to match the warrior. ​​

'''Reuploaded. '''I don't think it will pass, so I'm going to try improving it. Lightened coat color a bit and smudged some spots.  HA WK FI RE98  14:09, September 27, 2018 (UTC)

Thorn (Hunter) ~ For Approval
Scissor ears. 21:25, September 27, 2018 (UTC)

ooh! pretty! can you lighten the neck shading? Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:34, September 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Thanks! 15:07, September 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Messed with the shading again. 18:08, September 28, 2018 (UTC)