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Henry (KP) ~ Redone
Was on the Tweak list for being redone. OA was Bramble. This is horrible >:U 21:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Not. Horrible. Great. Is there a tabby M? If it's those two lines then disregard this... 21:33, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's just two lines. 21:36, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the back lines more maybe use the eye ref. on the tutorial, and darken the shading under his 'arm' 22:34, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think you should darken the overall shading. 00:29, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I was kind of confused about what you said, Wild. 03:07, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

And about the eyes, I copied 'em off of CLoudtail. 03:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look kind weird though, like his eyes are bugging out about a worm on the ground or something. Could you copy off the tutorial? They look more natural on there. 05:26, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes and thicken them. ,15:18,January 25,2012 (UTC)

I meant smudge the stripes into the fur, and the part where the belly meets the front arm there should be some shading, and use the PCA charart tutorial use the eye chart. 15:42, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. You guys were right abou tthe eyes xD 21:48, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the tail? 00:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the end of the stripes, darken the shading, add depth to the eyes, and add a couple more stripes to the legs. 01:55 Thu Jan 26

Lighten/define the earpink some more, too. I can barely see it. o3o 02:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes even more (smudge their points so they're sharper and less rounded at the ends) and add some more depth to the eyes. 03:44 Fri Jan 27

Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. 22:55, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded. 20:25, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white speck in the eye pure white. o3o Epic. <3 07:45, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:37, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink or something, old grandpa has trouble seeing it x3 Sky Dovahkiin  22:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-Uploaded. Gramps >:D 22:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define-ith the ear-ith pink-ith. *;3* 23:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back every so slightly. Daaaaaang, Fire. Where'd this skill come from all of the sudden? xD (jk, it's beautiful) 19:58, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Pfft, what talent? Re-Uploaded. 21:06, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and define the depth in the eyes  23:39, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:42, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Ki) ~ Redone
Sorry this is sloppy Dx OA was Quietstep with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart. Comments? 23:25, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, why do none of her images match her leader image? I just noticed they're all far too dark. 03:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  12:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 15:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be defined. 00:04, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

-Re-Uploaded.- 22:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

^^ Up there, with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart.. this is not twitter xD. Anyways add depth to the eyes, but if you don't want to you don't have to. 07:42, Tue, Jan, 31, 2012

XDDD Sorry. Re-Uploaded. 20:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The base pelt is still too dark, take the color from her haunch where I don't have it shaded  23:40, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) ~ Tweaked
First tweak, and I'm not proud of it. He needed patchy fur. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire Comments? 12:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, it looks good. ^.^ Could you perhaps blur where the skin meets the fur...? Where it meets looks too sharp. 13:13, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The patches look like you're doing them fo ra cat with long fur. Try looking at Spiderstar's leader image for an example of a patch in short fur. Also, they look pretty red, when he probably has pale skin considering his fur color. Contrary to popular belief, they don't need to match his ear pink. 14:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ew. 15:16, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Kay, maybe not that pale. Also... my point in linking to Spiderstar was to show that the patches really don't need to be outlined. Just blur them in to look like fur, not chipped paint. 17:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And no, the patches are not the same color as the ear pink. I just darkened the skin color. 17:28, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the skin, as you would the earpink on an apprentice or leader. 17:30, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the help on the patches Shelly. 23:28, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, they're still not quite there yet. 02:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Put a few lines around each patch, it helps keep lineart sense and helps to create a more natural feel (again, it kind of goes along with making sense with the lines). 04:47, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give the patches a more tanner look? Breeze whisker  20:02, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:45, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 03:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

This might sound stupid, but is it possible to add a runny nose? 00:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I did it with his mca image. Just a few green pixels around the nose. ;) 04:22, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:58, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt W) ~ Redone
Hey look, he's back! 8D OA=Nightshine with redo by Iceheart, same reasons as I stated earlier... Comments? 05:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I was sorta hoping he'd stay away...kidding. Lighten up the tail shading a bit. Sky Watchu want? 06:04, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink a tad, it looks sharp. Elo legs 20:55, January 29, 2012 (UTC) Cool texture. Define the eye depth. 03:20, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

The original artist was actually Rainwhisper, though it doesn't matter. Blur the tail stripes. 02:05, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't reuploaded yet, this week has been really busy. I'll have it done by tonight. 15:00, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) ~ Redone
He needed a redo because he was a triangle tabby before. OA was Bracken. Breeze whisker  06:12, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Goregeous. Define the earpink? 06:14, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

So good >.> Does he have a lighter chest? If it does, it beeds blurring cause it looks sharp. Sky Watchu want? 06:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  15:27, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn;t have a lighter chest...but since he's a tabby, tabbies usually have lighter underbellies or chests. So keep it there. 23:22, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I lightened his chest, belly, muzzle, bottom of his tail, and his paws. Breeze whisker  02:10, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the paler paws some. 02:16, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and it looks transparent a bit. 16:40 Sun Jan 29

What looks transparent? Breeze whisker  19:53, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink isn't transparent but the earpink still needs to be defined. 23:12, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  22:27, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

This is amazing!! *u* Can you make the earpink a tad bit pinker? It's still kinda hard to see. 03:17, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The eye looks kinda odd.... I don't think it's any style of eyes I've seen before. I know it's artist's choice, so you don't have to, but any chance of you changing it? This is absolutely breathtaking regardless. 07:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Its fine, as long as it shows eye color, there's nothing to worry about. Also, with what Heartmountain said, maybe make the earpink color the same as the older image, but not as pale..? cause this color right know kinda blends with the pelt. idunnolol. 00:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the earpink and added an extra pixel for the pupil in the eye. Breeze whisker  04:49, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) ~ Redone
OA was Mousetalon. He was a triangle tabby, and I got permission to redo him. Comments? 23:19, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Ears need to be tuffed. 23:25, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit. 02:20 Sun Jan 29

There is some white/pale gray pixels above the tail tip. 02:50, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Darken/define the shading. Breeze whisker  19:55, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purplely. -- Elo legs 20:54, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. 07:26 Wed Feb 1

Reuploaded. 17:44, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's still a pixel o' waste near the ear farthest away from us. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:11, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the legs. -- Elork   23:14, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) ~ Redone
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar. 05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D 19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should be shorter; it doesn't go all the way to his underarm. It's just on his flank. 20:50, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sunfish (W) ~ Tweaked
The bad shading on this has bugged me for a while. I'm the OA. Comments? 13:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Elo legs 13:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Y u steal my spot? XD Define the shading on the tail. 14:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random light spot on her haunch o3o Sky Dovahkiin 21:52, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the ear pink smaller? I didn't think it was supposed to take up the entire ear. But, then again, it is artist's choice. XD 19:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:34, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Honeyfur, and he was a triangle tabby. Comments? 18:05, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is so cute! :D 18:15 Tue Jan 31

Reuploaded 18:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 19:17, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:42, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. 21:54, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:33, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Piper (Ki) ~ Redone
It needed to be redone for several reasons. I got permission. OA was Mistystar. Comments? 01:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I hate you for making such amazing chararts. ;.; How are you so epic? DX Anyways, the only thing I can see that could be changed is, can you lighten the shading on the legs? 07:53, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aww *sniff sniff* Thank you so much Paleh ;.; *wuggles* I don't think I'll ever be as good as you 8) 14:38, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the white? So cute! :D 21:01, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look like strings of yarn, heehee. I think you should make the nose pink, since then nose is on white, not grey. 21:30, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies ^^ 22:25, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) ~ Tweaked
She needed her shading blurred/redone, and the OA looks like Sandstar12, with a tweak by Flamingomom. I also tweaked the earpink, because I believe hot-pink isn't exactly the right shade. xD Comments? 01:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I have to go make the background transparent... I'll reupload in a sec. 01:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and blur it. 01:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stupid earpink... x.x 01:29, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. ^^ Just lighten her a bit, as this is a bit too dark to be dark gray. 07:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gracias. o3o 03:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

She still looks a little dark. I think her images should be tweaked to make the color more like Yellowfang ^^  01:09, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Wing (PH) ~ Tweaked
Let's try this again, shall we? 19:42, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and just so I don't get into trouble... OA is moi. =D 19:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink. ;D Sky Dovahjerk 06:33, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is there any way you can change the pattern? I know this caused drama last time but it still looks like really awkward shading that needs blurring. 20:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm with Oblivion on this one. <span style="">04:43 Fri Feb 3

I think the pattern looks fine; it's perfectly natural and the shading on the white looks different from the patches. C:  Elork   19:13, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Alt Ro.) - Redone
OA was Nightflower of ThunderClan. She needed her snout shortened, more scars, ruffled fur, and her images were redone before because of the shading. 00:46, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add the creases to her face like her apprentice? Lovely ^^ 00:47, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded All I had to do was add a line...darn do I feel stupid! XD 01:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Have the line connect with the top of the muzzle, since the crease goes that far around. 01:17, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:31, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ Tweaked
Angry pregnant Yellowfang judges you. Anyway, made the muzzle match the fabulous apprentice image. Comments? 04:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is a bit of extra lineart sticking out on the left side (our left) of her chin. This is pretty epic Shellyward XP 04:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Ki) - Redone
Even for a Dark Forest cat, she's pretty cute. OA was Sandy, I think, with a redo by Darkhallows. Needed to match other images. Comments? 05:31, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenheart (MC) ~ Redone
Redone because it was a triangle tabby. OA was XxdovesongXX. Eh, I liked the loner better. Comments? 05:53, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like a mottled or heavily spotted tabby. So I suggest making the stripes larger and thicker. But looks good! 05:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thickened the major stripes. I think I fixed it. Thank you Stoney <3 06:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin and define the unshaded part on his tail. -Bloo not logged on

Shadepelt (W) ~ Tweaked
I really love tweaking shading. And I have Shadepelt yet again. XD OA was Mousetalon. I'm worried I made her too dark. Breeze whisker  06:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Waste in between the legs. ;3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 10:47, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks very blotchy, try to blur it a lot. If that doesn't work, you probably have to redo the shading. 14:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bit bigger. 14:34, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading alittle bit under the chin. -Bloo no logged

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  20:25, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (D) - Tweaked
Aaaah! I done it! This was really pain for me o.O Well, its not quite OK but it at last matches a little. I darkened stripes and shadings too.. OA is Night shine and redone by Mintstarr ,11:51,February 3,2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the whole image a tad. 16:28, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded ,16:49,February 3,2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (W) - Tweaked
Done with same way as deputy. OA is Dawnfeather, redone by BeautifulOblivion. ,12:03,February 3,2012 (UTC)

reuploaded by myself- blotchy paw shading ,13:49,February 3,2012 (UTC)

Lovely Leaf ^^ Blur the earpink a bit. 14:51, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded ,16:50,February 3,2012 (UTC)

Can you darken him a bit more? He seems brighter than his deputy. 20:49, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (E) - Redone
Aha! A spot >:D I really like this one <3. Original Artist was Sandy, shading was blotchy, and because the warrior image is all greem and blotchey, Ivy gave me permision to redo them on chat C: Comments? Elork  20:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. This is gorgeous Elo.(: Breeze  whisker  20:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Risa! Define the earpink and make it fill the ear more. 20:33, February 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

reuploaded C:  Better? -- Elork   20:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you move the bottom of the earpink up a little bit. It kinda looks too far down. I <3 this 23:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mumble785, tweaks by Bramble and Rainwhisper. Comments? 20:33, February 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Cloudtail (KP) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow, and he needed his collar removed. No reference ftw. 21:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and foreleg C:  Elork   23:05, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the eyes 8D 23:07, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (RC) - Redone
Another spot >:D. Same with the elder; Original Artist was Darkhallows. I :D. Comments? Elork  23:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely Elo ^^ Blur the earpink and define the shading on the tail. 23:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Why did it have to be redone? Wow........ ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Nevermind, just saw the elder.... ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:08, February 3, 2012 (UTC)