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Stoneclaw (W) ~ For Approval
Trying this with GIMP. -- 23:09, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink?Broken_Foot

Define the shading on the tail 23:11, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Base color doesn't seem to match other images

Smooth out the blotchy parts of the shading on the back and neck, and define the shading on the paws and the haunch. 23:15, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Why are the legs farthest from us lighter than the rest of the body? 23:31, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I colorpicked from the StarClan image and checked again and it is the right base color. And in my reupload I couldn't seem to get rid of the waste so can somebody who knows GIMP tell me how? -- 23:38, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Not to state the obvious, but there's lots of waste around the whole thingBroken_Foot

Well for GIMP, go to your lineart layer, fill the outside of the lineart in red, and then use the color select tool to select the red. Then, erase the red, then go to your shading layer and erase the waste there (make your brush super big, for it to get it all). It works on any layer, actually. Also, define the light. This really does look darker than the star, unless you picked from an area that was shaded on it.

There's leaking shading along the back and a bit on the hind leg closest to us. Also, define the shading on the tail, and the light on the front legs. 23:52, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little 00:23, 4/01/2017

Reups --  00:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's a lot of gaps in the earpink--can you fix that? 00:52 4/1/17 (UTC)

Reups --  01:29, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur the lighting (if the lighter parts on the <-- side are lighting, I'm tired) and earpink and possibly match the eye color a bit better? 01:50, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink some more and define the shading and shading depth some more. ~Patch   feather~   13:27, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  15:47, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading around the head and hind legs a little and smooth it out. ~Patch   feather~   16:46, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  17:05, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back paws and near the flank and define the light on the front legs. ~Patch   feather~   18:13, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

So this are the main colors I used for the StarClan image; the base color is 757575, then for the shading mainly 454545, for earpink A59090. 18:24, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the colors! c: --  20:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

smooth the lighting more 22:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

The eye colour is still quite different. 23:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:28, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Make the lineart black. 03:34, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reups --  15:22, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there's still color leaking onto the lineart 17:51, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I tried..but I don't know how to fix that. --  18:24, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try just replacing the lineart layer; some parts look dark gray. Overlapping the lineart layer should fix any problems like that. Also, smooth the paler parts, because this image shouldn't have any, and it kinda looks like it does. Besides that, define the light on both front legs and round out the shading on the rump.

Reups I tried to replace the lineart but that one turned dark gray too. I know it's because of the shading but I don't know how to stop the shading from coloring the lineart. ._. --  18:39, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

The layer with your lineart should be the topmost layer, or second topmost depending on how you do your eyes and stuff. Basically, the lineart should be above the base pelt, shading, highlights, ect.

Reups I tried to erase some of the color on the lineart. --  18:47, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit 20:49, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  21:54, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smooth it out.

Reups Now I have a feeling it's too dark :c --  01:58, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Fox, you need to really smooth out the shading everywhere.Broken_Foot

Shading's also leaking away from the lineart a little bit on the foreleg closest to us and on his underbelly (unless the underbelly was intentional?). 20:50, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading depth. 02:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

where's his pupil? 19:02, 4/06/2017

Still working?

His pupil is on the left side of his eye. --  23:06, April 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * No, there needs to be a pupil visible in the eye. Look at some other warrior images for reference. The eye is just the blank model for the warrior image. 15:22, 4/08/2017

Eye style is artist's choice. I can see it and I know it's there. It's fine, and you're being picky. I've even made warrior images with eyes like this in the past.

Reups --  20:04, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading overall, I really can hardly make it out. 23:51, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:59, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 00:01, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit imo

Reups --  00:17, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's gray leaking all over the lineart, please make sure it's black. I also think you could define shading depth, and maybe lighten the shading on the legs, it looks like his legs are darker than the rest of his body 00:36, April 10, 2017 (UTC)


 * Make sure what's black; the shading? Shading tint is artist's choice. Also no to the lightening the shading on the legs, get rid of some of the shading on the legs, to define the light source. Define the shading everywhere else as well. 02:01, 4/10/2017


 * I am sure Snow meant making the lineart black since there is some gray leaking over it. 02:18, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, that was definitely a comment about the lineart, Winter. Also, I'm going to disagree with your comment about lightening the shading. Even if Foxey gets rid of some of the shading, it's still going to be a tad bit darker, so lightening the shading wouldn't hurt in the least.

Reups --  23:00, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. 13:47, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:13, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

The shading along the back appears to be leaking away from the lineart. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:02, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's still a little gray leaking onto the lineart, particularly on the rump and base of the tail, and could you smooth out the tail shading a bit, there are some lighter hard edged pixels towards the top of it 18:30, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (Q) ~ For Approval
Can't get the stripes right >:( Also, wasn't sure if I should put "For Evaluation" or "For Approval 23:55, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Nah it can be For Approval, since you've got your first image approved already.

Define the shading depth. :) This is great for your second image. 00:03, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Your sig is changing the words below it. can you fix that?

nvm

Reuploaded Shading depth defined. And I know, I wanted to make my sig bigger but it also made the timestamp big so.. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 00:35, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thicken the stripes on the front legs? They are a bit thicker on the other images. 00:58, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs, define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 01:00, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Her stripe pattern doesn't really seem to match her other imageBroken_Foot

I think it does. 01:43, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I kinda agree that the stripes don't look great, I think they're more swirly on the loner image but it's just hard to copy on this blank also I'm new at this   04:22, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, they're pretty curvy on the loner image. If you're not sure how it was made, Scarlet is still active from time to time and I'm sure she could give you an idea from where to go. She's the one who made that pattern.

Reuploaded I didn't talk to Scarlet yet but I tried to make the body stripes better 21:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:34, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:32, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define her paler parts a bit more, and I don't think the earpink really matches the loner. Also, the stripes should be more swirly on the <-- haunch/leg and the <-- side of the back.

Reuploaded I actually colorpicked from the loner but it's hard to tell what part is earpink and what part is fur so this time I colorpicked from the deputy. About the swirliness of the stripes.. I wasn't exactly sure exactly where you were talking about but I think I fixed the trouble areas 00:21, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading 17:50, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:52, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back, and on the --> side of the cat some, most especially the chest

Reuploaded There isn't supposed to be any light on the chest really, but I blurred the shading and it looks lighter so there ya go 00:11, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

In your source, there would be light on the chest. Also lessen some of the facial shading, and add some light to the under-the-tummy back leg 02:02, 4/10/2017

Reuploaded Ok so I did lessen the facial shading, and gave the chest some light but I don't want to add anymore light since I was copying the shading from another queen and that one didn't have any light on the chest 04:25, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, because I wanted a little  more shading on the face  04:48, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the pale parts on the chest - they look sharp

Reuploaded I knew there was something off about the chest lol 23:52, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg farthest from us? Also define the shading on the one closest to us. 13:49, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I copied the shading on Brightflower's queen image and it didn't have any light on that back leg so shouldn't it be fine? 20:49, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gave in 20:58, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Erase away a little of the shadow on the left cheek, I feel like it shouldn't be completely in shadow with this light source. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:06, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

I've seen other queens with this exact same shading placement and there's no light on the left cheek 03:13, April 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * As per Snow, not every light source has to be 30000099% correct :I 13:00, 4/12/2017

Also the pale chest part looks like it needs to be smoothed out a lil more 13:14, 4/12/2017

Reuploaded 18:39, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Running Fox (Kit) - CBA
Remember the first time I tried charart and it was this one and it was actually awful because I had no idea what I was doing? I do. 17:41, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad? I remember. Your Chararts have gotten better :DBroken_Foot

Maybe smooth out the shading on his chest a bit? 19:34, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

reups 19:38, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

can you desaturate the patches?

reups 20:18, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Get rid of the light by the belly, there wouldn't be any there. 15:21, 4/08/2017

reups There wasn't any light there in the first place?? I defined the shading a bit so hopefully you can see it. 17:32, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, wait, if you mean the little circle by the ---> arm, that's the same on a lot of kit images and it goes with the light source. If you did mean the actually belly, then ignore this lol 17:34, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ---> front leg a bit. 22:49, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

reups 01:02, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

I really like this. Maybe define the shading depth just a touch? 16:53, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

reups Shading is so weird with these tiny little kit blanks 17:25, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 23:54, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any way you could alter the coloring for the base somehow? I honestly can't tell that and the spots apart, and it looks more like a solid. And before you say anything, I checked on all three screens I have.

I'll try snowed, but it's going to be difficult since the base and the spots are on the same layer. I might just redo the base entirely so I can define the spots. I'll work something out. 20:03, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

reups This good? Or is this straying too far into dark brown? 20:20, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the base is too dark brown.

Can you define the redness of the speckles? They look more dull ginger, imo

reups I reverted back to the original base color, but I just tried to define/brighten the speckles. 02:02, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you dull the speckles down a bit?

I know it's annoying, but can I get a second opinion? If I dull down the speckles, I'll be told they're not red enough, and if I make them more red they'll be neon. 02:28, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Star, I think they're fine. They don't look too neon, or too dark. PCA is being too picky, as Snowed said :/Broken_Foot

Sorry. Although I do think it looks a little too neon, but you don't have to listen.

They look fine :/ Also, please don't tell me I don't have to listen because once your comment is posted on here, it makes it everyone's business.Broken_Foot

Well, I hate to carry this argument on, but i really do agree with Star. I think you brightened the patches way too much. I'm pretty sure "red" is just another way to say "ginger"? (not sure) *hides in a corner*

reups Argument ended. I made them orange. I saturated the color. They are ginger. I've seen chararts with brighter reds than this, this is not neon. 20:04, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Guys, seriously stop arguing. :/ let it go. the spots are described as red, so brighten them up 21:12, 4/11/2017

reups 21:23, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs and hip. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:07, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

reups 01:24, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 01:53, 4/12/2017

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
Shading is annoying. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed out and define the dark splotch on her ear?Broken_Foot

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 17:52, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth shading some more and define it on the legs? 19:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:41, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little more, define the light on the legs and tail. 20:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:42, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little. Also, I think the belly shading should extend further ---> way, towards where the haunch overlaps the underbelly. 22:24, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a bit? 23:40, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you move the splotch more on the ear and define it? It kind of blends in with the shading on the side of the head 01:10, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:54, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on both front legs and the back one farthest from us, and smooth out the shading a bit? 17:41, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's a little piece on the belly near the hips where the shading is missing. 22:47, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the belly and a little way above the base of the tail 00:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit dark.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:10, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the <-- front leg near the lineart. 14:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The waste is still there :/ and I think shading could be lightened and smoothed some more  15:06, April 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * The shading darkness is fine, Snow. But I do agree on the smoothing of it 02:05, 4/10/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Not to be rude, but I cannot tell the difference between each of your uploads. I noticed only little to no change to your image. Excuse me if I come off rude, but I really can't tell the differenceBroken_Foot

Smooth the shading.

Just thought I'd point out that the waste is still there- right below the belly, and a little at the top of the image above the tail 23:59, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's a reddish marking on the lower part of the belly that I don't think is supposed to be there. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:10, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Splashpaw (K) ~ CBA
matches apprentice colors

Lighten the shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:04, April 11, 2017 (UTC)Rainbow

Reuploaded just by a few ticks, I prefer it dark

CBA? 02:02, 4/12/2017

Zelda (KP) ~ CBA
it's time for DINNER. (what's up I based this off my irl cat, jinkies) 00:42, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

What! That design and collar are on fire. Define earpink? (lol this is getting awkward. :p)

reuploaded help how do you triforce. I've never played a zelda game in my life.</Small> 02:42, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the facial shading?

reuploaded 17:43, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Leafstar (Alt Warrior) ~ For Approval
this took way too long

probably got the heading wrong, correct me if i did 01:39, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the hind leg farthest from us. -- 01:42, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

define the ear pink 02:31, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white patches <span style="">00:52, 4/12/2017

Smooth out the shading on the upper front leg/shoulder. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:12, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smoke (KP) - CBA
first kittypet... the shading suckedd. 03:02, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

This is lovely, smooth oyt the shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:06, April 11, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Re-uploaded. 13:44, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Really pretty. CBA?

Pinestar (A) - CBA
I love Pinestar.

I think the shading is leaking a bit all around the stomach area and a pixel at the bottom of the chest. Out of curiosity, may I ask why you love him so much? :) 03:37, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Because he's a character who doesn't just bow to the will of StarClan and he looks out for himself. He had the courage to decide he no longer wanted to lead, instead of just leading his Clan on and not being true to himself. I've wanted a Pinestar story for years. Ever since we got Bluestar's Prophecy, I've wanted to know more about this guy.

CBA?

Loki(KP) ~ For Approval
Eliza, do you like it Uptown? It's quiet Uptown....Broken_Foot

Can you imagine, smooth out the shading? Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:11, April 11, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Define the eye depth a smidge?

The shading is fine as is. <span style="">00:52, 4/12/2017

The < earpink is very purplish and is a very different colour than the ---> ear pink. Also, smoothen out the ---> ear pink. 00:54, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

That's from the tinted shading.Broken_Foot

Then could you like change the tint? The purple earpink would look kind of strange. Please dont yell at me please dont.

The tint looks fine, and if I change it to-lets just say black-then it might blend too well. And to be honest, I like the dark blue tint. Soooo, second opinion?Broken_Foot

It's fine. Define the eye depth a little? 03:31, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I know there's no replacing what we lost, and you need time..Broken_Foot

Broken, stop with the its fine and second opinion crap. Its getting way out of hand. Of course you can see it fine, its your image. When someone tells you to change something, change it. This is an approval page for a reason. <span style="">12:59, 4/12/2017

Did you smoothen out the ---> ear pink? 13:58, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

The nose should be black. <span style="">14:55 Wed Apr 12

Skyheart (Q) - For Approval
All colors are from her warrior 06:08, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Really pretty. I'll CBA this

The color looks a little bit darker. I checked the files, and the kit, apprentice, and warrior are all darker than the StarClan. Is this. . . I dunno. . . a mistake?

It's the shading tint/color Star :/ It looks fine.Broken_Foot

The texture doesn't seem to match. 01:32, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

The texture "not matching" does not drastically alter the coloring of the image, therefore it is more than acceptable. Plus, it's not like everyone is able to get perfectly matching texture all of the time. Different blanks call for different styles.


 * ...so do i need to fix anything...? 04:10, April 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * The texture and shading tint seem fine as it is, so I dont think soBroken_Foot

Blossomfall (Q) ~ CBA
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Define the shading on the front leg farthest from us? wasn't expecting Blossomfall to have kits. 13:33, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded it should've been IvyxBlossom ):

this shouldn't have eyelashes. (agreed) 17:35, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thornclaw is like, what. 20 years older than her -.-

There's this weird smudge in the middle of it--is that supposed to be there? Also, fyi, Thornclaw is about six years older than Blossomfall. yeesh that is a big difference in cat ages. ;-;

can you outline or something? i can't see it.

As long as they're both consenting adults, it doesn't bug me. :P Darken/define the belly shading a bit? And it might just be me, but the main colors (not the ginger or white patches) seems a bit lighter than the other images. But maybe I'm just imagining things. And define the tail shading. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:15, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

I really dunno how so sorry. :P

ttttttt why Thornclaw (IVYBLOSSOM) Might just be me, but I think the petals seem less smudged on her other images?

Re-uploaded tried to unweird and unsmudge the patches + defined shading. thorn claw and blossom #notcanon

Guys, keep the shipping discussion off the approval page. <span style="">02:01, 4/12/2017

CBA? <span style="">13:16, 4/12/2017

Crystal (Q) - CBA
Meh. <span style="">15:16 Tue Apr 11

Define and spread out the tail shading, it looks a bit flat. This looks nice. :D Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 01:20, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks ^^ <span style="">13:58 Wed Apr 12

CBA? This is pretty :3 <span style="">14:00, 4/12/2017

Morningstar (Star) ~ CBA
17:04, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Is the nosepink filled in Rainbowmistake (talk) 01:19, April 12, 2017 (UTC)chat

Define the tail shading. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:21, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define eye depth while you're at it?

I think the eye depth is perfectly fine. Define the shaing depth a tad? 01:26, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload I think the eye depth is fine. 01:32, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

The eye depth is fine. Well done Water. Define the shading in the ear ---> a tad?Broken_Foot

Smooth out tail shading? it looks a bit blotchy

Reupload 01:51, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a lil? <span style="">02:03, 4/12/2017

Reupload 02:15 April 12, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">13:17, 4/12/2017

Squirrelwhisker (E) ~ CBA
All colors from warrior image. Comments? 19:43, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 01:17, April 12, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded. 01:21, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define it more on the ear please? `

Reuploaded. 06:31, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">13:18, 4/12/2017

Plumkit (TC) (K) ~ For Approval
Shading dark cats is a pain 20:02, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

So sorry, but could you lighten the shading a bit? It's kind of really dark, and I can barely make out anything on the shaded spots. (Again I'm so sorry please don't yell at me)

I think the shading looks fine as is 02:50, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

You all need to seriously cut it out with the "its fine" stuff. If someone tells you to do something, do it. Lighten the shading <span style="">12:55, 4/12/2017

Tyr (KP) ~ For Approval
I wonder how you say this? Teer? Turr? Tire? Prolly Tire. Anyway, I did a thing with the texture...yeah. Idk I might change the light source. <span style="">02:59, 4/12/2017

can you maybe....I dunno....expand the shading or smth? it looks a bit flat. 03:12, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

The texture looks a lil bit flat too, smooth it just a little bit. It looks real cool though. 03:29, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Meh <span style="">03:49, 4/12/2017

Can you lighten the shading?

Reuploaded <span style="">13:20, 4/12/2017

Stemkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I guess his name is kinda cute 03:04, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't the tail shading be along the topside of the tail? Ignore me if it's a-okay 03:28, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

It's fine? I have so many kit images that use this exact same source. Stop being so nitpicky.

Define the shading depth a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:04, April 12, 2017 (UTC)Rainbow

Could you actually expand the shading a smidge? <span style="">13:21, 4/12/2017

Define the stripes a smidge. I can see them, but not very well

Reups 18:42, April 12, 2017 (UTC)