Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Poppyfrost (K) - Redone
Colors picked from Sorreltail's kit Moo (talk) 08:24, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you dull the shading tint some, and maybe smudge the blotches a bit more? 19:04, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sure! I just cant get on my computer for a few hours! Moo (talk) 23:36, October 10, 2019 (UTC) Reuploaded Moo (talk) 06:53, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

There should be more variation in the dapple size and shape, and the patches should be sharper than what you've currently got too - if you'd like I have sorreltail's warrior file handy (which is the master design/colours)

Frogtail (A) - Redone
OA is Icy; redone to remove mottles. -- 23:42, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

your source is a little confusing, maybe remove the section going across the flank, and it should be all good? maybe also define the depth just a little bit on the face, and neck area

Fixed -- 21:25, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Until/if you can get that other nom to pass, this needs the texturing the rest of the set has.

Tigerstar (TPB) (Rogue) ~ Redone
accidentally uploaded this. can an admin delete it for me? thanks

would you like one of the files? there's a few little layers for his face to fiddle with if it helps :D

if not; here's the flat colours of the deputy for how the stripes should sit (as the dorsal stripe doesn't start till after the shoulders), the back legs also don't have stripes that go right down, there's an ankle cuff and then two little dashes, as well as the black markings on the bottom of the paws reaching up the leg to the tail.

hopefully the flat deputy helps

yes the file would be helpful (gosh I had a hard time colorpicking). send it to afrikinzi@gmail.com

sent them over!

Re-uploaded thanks! I redid the stripes

Tallstar (D) - Redone
color picked off the image directly 03:56, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Should he have the white paws and tail-tip? I know the image doesn't have them, but he's still described with them. 04:37, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Also, he needs a long tail. 04:39, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Adding on - he's also cited with a white tail tip

Brighten up the white; he doesn’t look black-and-white at all. ​

reup will add long tail and fix other issues when i come back from class. also, this is what happens when you solely match his image and ignore his description... 12:24, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the tail tip and new paw whites slightly; seem a bit sharp

Smallstar (L) - Tweaked
I expanded the black tail-tip, made the black curve onto the chest, and added white to the left side of the face. The OA was me. 16:18, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste floating around the head and > side of the cat

this needs to match the deputy. all the patches don't match 23:38, 10/11/2019

oh my god im dumb af disregard 23:38, 10/11/2019

Reuploaded  09:24, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (L) - Redone
oa was hawky; pattern overhaul + mackerel stripes

Bramblestar (L) - Redone
oa was me; pattern overhaul + mackerel stripes

Tallstar (Lo) - Redone
OA is Skt; redone to match official art. -- 22:19, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the lineart towards the tailtip, and brighten the white up to match the deputy above?

Fixed -- 22:42, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

The hind paw furthest from us needs to be white to match the deputy. 23:14, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed -- 23:19, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

The patch style doesn't seem to have the same sharper/smudgy thing the deputy has going

Fixed *intense screaming in background* -- 03:32, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

The base colour here seems darker than the deputy, which has a more bluish/greenish tint from the colour pick.

Fallowfern (Q) ~ Redone
yes i see the white line, no i don't know how to get rid of it, so i'll just crop this off-GIMP after this goes along

nvm got it

Bramblestar (W) ~ Redone
14:32, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Tallstar (L) ~ Redone
not tweaked