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StarClan - Silver Nomination
Well, all the other non-four clans were being nominated, so I thought I would work on this one. The article looks fine to me, but I have one question. Does the History section need references? There was a comment on the talk page saying we did, and I wasn't sure. I don't think so, but if we do, I will be more than happy to add them. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, history sections do not need references, but can you add more references for the description sections? 23:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

For like Fourtrees and Warm-Rocks? The other description sections have a reference for almost every sentence. 03:23, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

I guess you could, but I'm not sure. Maybe expand The Sight a little more, because Spottedleaf had a big moment. 01:47, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you don't have to cite every sentence, but you should cite every sentence that is unconfirmed or non-obvious. 01:03, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 23:58, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

If he isn't, may I take over? 02:00, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, sure. He hasn't left a comment for a few weeks now. 16:29, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I had this expanded a long time ago x3 Comments? 15:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, XD. Ok, so find another reference for the last sentence in the intro. Then find refs for the last paragraph in territory, Fourtrees, Warm-Rocks, Realtion to Living Cats, Ceremonies, Influence, Life in StarClan, and Other Ancestors. Sorry, I know that's a lot, but if I become inactive again, I'd like to know work is still being done without me having to comment. XD 18:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Done! 01:14, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

A lot of references aren't specific enough like: "Revealed in Night Whispers" or "Such as when Brambleclaw is invited to undertake a quest". The references need to be actual books with page numbers. 01:41, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oops! I forgot. I'll fix those. 20:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I took care of a lot of them. All you have to do is the last paragraph in Life in StarClan and then Other Ancestors. 23:53, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? If no comment in 5 days, this will be given to someone else or declined. 22:39, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Place of No Stars ~ Silver Nomination
I added the Crookedstar's Promise section in the History and the references. Comments?  Owl   X    G    l    itt    er   4LIFE..    The colors of fall  2:27, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Flesh out Starlight and ''Outcast. ''  Swee  tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think! 13:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Add more references to the last apragraph of the Description. I'm pretty sure the territory can be expanded, and references need to be there, too. I think the Dark Forest was mentioned one or two times in the Original Series. I'm not exactly sure, so you should check. 00:09, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I expanded all sections and the Dark Forest wasn't mentioned in the original series.  Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 01:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand SotM? 16:28, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any way you can expand Starlight? 03:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

For SotM the harpercollins isn't working so might take a little longer and I'll get to doing Starlight right now. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  00:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Did Starlight <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 06:11, October 7, 2011 (UTC) Have you done Outcast yet? Just wondering. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 02:01, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I did Outcast but there wasn't much times the Place of No Stars was mentioned. I got to doing Sign of the Moon eventually. Comments? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 04:26, October 9, 2011 (UTC) Could you get The rest of the history at the same level you have for Sign of the Moon? 07:00, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Robin is right. I'm pretty sure everything can be expanded without focusing on a particular cat. 00:01, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? If no comment in 5 days, this will either be given to someone else or declined. 01:45, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not sure how I can expand it. I tried using Harpercollins, and expanded the different sections in the Omen of the Stars. 23:50, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Go write about each time some cat went into the Dark Forest. For help, you can see Tigerstar's or Hawkfrost's page. 22:42, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded it as best as I could. 05:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! CBV? 01:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rat ~ Silver Nomination
(I'm looked at the guidelines first :) And I'm pretty sure it follows the, if not I'm a fail xD) Comments?   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 00:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, you read the guidelines! XD Ok, so you need references for the introduction, Description,a dn Relation to Cats. Also, look at Wolf, Sheep, and Beaver to see what the Description section really means. It needs to be kind of like a research article with real information, not just from the books. Try to model this article after the ones I showed you. Even though this needs work, it won't be declined because it technically does follow the Guidelines, just needs to be tweaked to fit the other Silver articles. 05:27, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I did! And ok I'll start doing that now. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 18:10, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

SquirrelFlame, do you think you could help me? Please? S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 00:44, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, that took a while. Ok, Description section's all done. You don't have to worry about that anymore. 02:16, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks SquirrelFlame, I  really  appreciated that :D. I'll get started on some of the other stuff that needs work on it. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 22:15, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 21:02, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

You need references for the introduction and Relation to Clan cats section. 00:02, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

I added all or most of the references for the Relation to Clan cats section, but now I have to go, so tomorrow I will add them in the introduction. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 00:35, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

I got a chance to get on at school, and added one or two to the introduction, all I could find was next to nothing. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 21:45, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you're either going to have to fnd something or delete the intro and add facts that can be cited. 23:51, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll start doing that. 00:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Done, how's that? 00:09, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Your headings for Omen of the Stars and Power of Three aren't done right. 22:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, this article is close to being finished anyway, so all I took care of some issues. All I think you should do now is expand Firestar's Quest, SkyClan's Destiny, and Midnight. 00:44, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll get started on that now. 00:03, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 00:44, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Even more, especially Firestar's Quest and SkyClan's Destiny. Go really into detail about the battle with the rats. 02:03, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Done Firestar's Quest. I'll start on ''SkyClan's Destiny. 23:24, October 26, 2011 (UTC)''

Ok, I did Firestar's Quest so you could understand how detailed I want SkyClan's Destiny to be. Also, there's a lot of spelling mistakes (don't worry, I spell wrong while typing fast, too) that need to be fixed. 02:03, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

FA November 2011
So, its time to start discussing the Feature Article. Any suggestions? 21:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Whispering Cave or DarkClan or maybe even BloodClan? S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 22:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it would be nice to do a Clan since we've never done one before. People also have been nominating the Clans more recently, so we could do one of the mythological clans such as TigerClan, LionClan, or LeopardClan. 00:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't we do BloodClan? It seems to be the longest article. 20:44, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

BloodClan sounds good. Lets get some more opinions. 20:46, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

I like BloodClan. How about ThunderClan if it hasn't already been featured. It is the longest article and looks good to me? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 01:19, October 15, 2011 (UTC) ThunderClan sounds good, too. :P Maybe we can do that next time? 01:46, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, I was thinking maybe LeopardClan next month, but back to this month, ThunderClan is good too, but I think BloodClan might be better, it relates to Rememberance Day, sorta :P   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 20:39, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

So ThunderClan or BloodClan? It seems OwlxGlitter and I want ThunderClan and Mistystar and Sweetflower want BloodClan. Let's wait for one more person to decide. 00:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

ThunderClan is fine. We can do BloodClan next month, or LeopardClan. 22:31, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I like ThunderClan and BloodClan, I'd like either of them. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall

08:10, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

ThunderClan. I like the article a lot, I actually just read it, and I think it would make a good FA for this month. 11:13, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, we'll go with ThunderClan then. CBV? 00:04, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

FA vote is up! Go vote! 00:01, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Great Clans ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded it a lot, added a Description and History section, and fillied in the Canon Great Clans with more detail. 01:36, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you add any more detail to Dawn and Outcast? I know they're short, so if you can't, its fine. 22:33, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I couldn't add that much, but I'm sure it'll be fine. 00:09, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? 04:08, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? I hate approving my own nominations, but with no other comments in 6 days, this is just taking up space on the talk page. 00:57, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 02:06, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Voting
Right, I know this project isn't as active as PC, but I hate closing nominations with only 2 votes on it. I think nominations shouldn't be accepted until at least three people have voted. So I urge you all to go vote on any of the nominations we may have. You don't even have to vote yay, just abstain if you want to. But please vote on these articles so that the nominations look like more of a community decision. 22:47, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry! I try my best too. But sometimes my computer is too slow to let it load. 00:46, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetflower, it's fine! :) I'm not blaming you, I'm teling the whole project in general. Besides, you're one of the few that vote on the majority of them anyway. 02:01, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know. :P JUst thought I'd put that out there though ;) 23:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tribe of Rushing Water ~ Silver Nomination
I made it more of a Clan article and deleted some of the info that was supposed to be on General Tribe Information. It looks a lot better and cleaner now, so I think it's good! 22:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! But in the introduction of the section Territory, it is all one sentence. Could you re-word it or shorten it or add another sentence to make it have two sentences in it? 23:32, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Other comments? 00:34, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Sunset please. 00:06, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Finished. I can't add anything else about the Tribe there because I state the reason they left in Outcast which is when it was stated in the book. Anything else? 04:13, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you flesh out Eclipse a little bit? 02:01, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes! So many more comments this time! XD Done with expanding Eclipse. Anything else? 02:20, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is Up!
Just as a reminder, vote is up for Great Clans! 02:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)