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Plumclaw (Q) ~ For Approval
Defined the shading more

Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 16:22, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think this needs a date and reservation on the chart

I reserved her. Reuploaded Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 20:37, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 15:09, Feb 16, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I can somewhat see that it is there, but it is extremely faint. If no one else is having issues seeing it, feel free to ignore this. I don't have the best eyesight at times. 18:43 Thu Feb 16

Could you define the eye depth some? Unless I'm blind and it's there. I can't see any, so if there's none, try using an orange color as the depth marker, because it will look better, depth-wise. 13:01, 2/17/2017

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  09:00, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 09:18, Feb 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us :) 01:56, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 17:10, Feb 27, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the <-- side of the face, belly, and front paws. And, could you perhaps expand the shading a little on the belly? It might help with the depth

I think that the depth could stand to be defined some more, it's looking quite flat. 19:31, 2/28/2017

Fallowstar (L) ~ For Approval
Haven't done this in a while. - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:06, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the lighter belly a little?

I can't see that the legs are lighter very well, either. 00:14, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yeah that was kinda dark. - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:30, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and shading on the face a bit. 01:54, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Don't the hind legs need to be lighter too? Shypaw11 (talk) 01:57, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded They need to be light but you can hardly see them. - Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  02:12, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken and define the shading? 13:06, 2/17/2017

Re-uploaded - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  21:55, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Darken it a fair bit more, please.

Re-uploaded - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  23:50, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

I'm a little confused what your light source is. There should be at least some light on --> side of the chest. I'm not sure if it's because the shading is faint or what, but it looks a bit muddled there. Darken and smooth out the shading..its fairly blotchy. Sorry if this was a bit on the blunt side...I'm dealing with some housemate problems and typing this quickly on my phone... 22:32 Tue Feb 21

Try and add a little depth to the shading, that should help.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  03:21, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the lighter markings a little more, please, and blend them some more too.  09:57 Thu Feb 23 

Re-uploaded - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  18:03, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the lighting on the front legs a bit 16:59, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  13:13, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's some light/shading leaking onto the belly down by the front paws. <span style="">19:31, 2/28/2017

shading could also use more depth to it. 20:49, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smudge/blur the lighter parts? 21:20, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Dovestar (RC) (L) ~ CBA
Eh...not totally pleased with the blind eye :/ Any advice? 18:50, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe, instead of the pupil being black, make it a milky-blue color? Blind eyes are usually like that. 19:00, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit, and perhaps smudge the gray paws and muzzle. This is also a good example of a blind eye, which I think is what Su was going for.

Reups Thank you so much. I hope this is better. 01:58, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

I don't know if I'm blind or not, but for a moment, I couldn't see the milky blue in his eye. 😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 06:26, February 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

His eye is fine <span style="">14:33, 2/20/2017

Could you expand the shading on the chest a little bit?  <span style="">09:52 Thu Feb 23 

Reups 16:57, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there'd be any light on the <--- haunch <span style="">19:32, 2/28/2017

Reups 00:36, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 21:21, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 22:06, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">03:52, 3/02/2017

Fallensnow (Warrior) ~ For Approval
Not to be pushy. But aren't I supposed to be in the apprentices' section now? I asked to join, and Stealth welcomed me in, I just never got put into the group. :) 22:11, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading and define the earpink just a bit. Very nice (: <span style="">22:26 Tue Feb 21

A SW will add you in soon. Please be patient. You dont technically have to be on the list to be a part of PCA but just make sure youre keeping track of how many images you do so you can become a warrior later. As for the image, smooth out the shading some more <span style="">22:28, 2/21/2017

Reuploaded 22:32, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit purple-ish, maybe shift it more towards a pink? Also, I think the shading could be smoothed out a bit on the chest and tail. 22:36, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:50, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the head and neck area, and define the shading on the <--- front leg and hind leg the furthest away from us? 19:18, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:31, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the head and neck area. <span style="">02:16, 2/23/2017

There are big spots on the back that go in a line. Spread those out? 21:22, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Try and give the spots a little more variation in size and shape. Looking good :)  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas 

Reuploaded 11:11, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the neck. 00:24, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:53, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

I think it should be smoothed out a bit more on the legs, just the front ones <span style="">23:34, 2/27/2017

Sorry for double comment but it seems a bit odd to me that there's a darker line of shading on his back, but it doesn't follow to the haunch, and it seems to be like that in a few other places <span style="">19:33, 2/28/2017

Maybe lighten the shading on the leg, head and back down to her arm? For a moment, I thought it was a stripe.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 19:56, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Still working Wolf? <span style="">20:39, 3/02/2017

Falling Rain (SC) - CBA
meh  00:45, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Define shading depth on the belly a bit? 19:19, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:10, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the front leg that's on the ground, and possibly lighten it a tiny bit everywhere else?  <span style="">09:50 Thu Feb 23 

Re-uploaded 06:15, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

The shading on the front leg closest to us seems to have the lightsource confused. I believe that shading is supposed to be on the ---> side. <span style="">19:28, 2/28/2017

There's a small speck of waste next to the leg furthest from us. The front leg in case you get confused😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 21:27, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded 01:36, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define shading depth? 21:23, March 1, 2017 (UTC)


 * I think it's fine 00:10, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah tbh it's fine. CBA? <span style="">03:53, 3/02/2017

​Slatepelt (W)~For Approval
Sorry if I did something I wasn't supposed to, I forgot how to do everything...😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:17, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded! Fixed the shading, was too sharp or something😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:27, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

As a WindClan cat, he needs short fur. 04:49, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

He's a thick-furred cat...😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:52, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Thick-furred does not mean long-furred. 04:57, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

That's embarrassing😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:58, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

To back up what Bluestar said; unless they are specifically called a "long-furred WindClan cat" or a "short-furred RiverClan cat", they should be short for WindClan and long for RiverClan, due to multiple statements in the series about their pelt lengths. Also, please stop aligning and thumbing your images.

As for the image itself; smooth out the shading a lot, give the eye white, and swap the tail shading; the source you have would have the tail shading on the other end, I do believe.

Is there a pupil? Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 16:53, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste behind the hind legs and around the tail 19:20, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

I think it needs the shading to be lightened quite a bit too. <span style="">13:42, 2/24/2017

Re-uploaded! Not entirely happy with the shading though....😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 03:33, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

There is a very tiny bit of waste between the tail and the back. Also, the shading could still be lightened. :) 03:35, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Still working on the haunch shading😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 14:31, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

I think the tail shading should be flipped to <--- this side of the tail, and it could stand to be defined some more on the legs. <span style="">19:35, 2/28/2017

Define the eye depth, and I believe there's leaking shading throughout the image. 19:39, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I'm not the greatest at shading and such, but I did darken it a bit😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 22:16, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Smudle/blur shading and define the shading depth. 21:24, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Just a nudge to Skye or someone with renaming capabilities, this needs to be renamed to Slatepelt.warrior.png, not with 2 .png xD Also, as for the image, I think the depth is fine, as the shading is quite dark anyway, but yes to the smoothing of the shading <span style="">03:54, 3/02/2017

Somehow, I must have exported the wrong file to the correct one, and all my layers are gone, so I'll have to redo everything. I'll get to it.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 15:30, March 2, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reedstar (L) ~ For Approval
what is this thing you call a 'classic tabby'  <span style="">19:39 Wed Feb 22 

Smudge/blur the <- earpink 20:32, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded  <span style="">09:48 Thu Feb 23 

Define the shading on the front legs. I love the shading tint, by the way. 15:33, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

reups Thanks =D  <span style="">13:29 Mon Feb 27 

Could you define the shading depth a tiny bit on the tail so it doesn't seem too flat? <span style="">19:35, 2/28/2017

Sweetbriar (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Can't believe I actually did this! I'm a beginner don't judge me. Also I want to know how you guys do those signatures so pretty. BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 17:44, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Looks pretty good for your first image! Although, since it's your first, we need the title to be 'For Evaluation' instead of 'For Approval'. Also this needs to be reserved on the charart table. As for the image itself, the shading needs to be smoothed out more, and it looks like you're missing lineart on the eyes. Try overlapping the current lineart onto the existing image, and that should fix it. Try to blend the earpink a little more and maybe use a little more pinkish-gray color instead of orange. Technically all colors need to be colorpicked from the existing images, and how you do that is you save one of the older images and open that into the art program and colorpick from the places you need to color that specific area. In terms of stripe placement, it needs quite a bit more, and I believe there is texture, or that's probably just the stripes smudged. Sorry if this is a wall of text. ;-; <span style="">17:59, 2/23/2017

Sorry for double post, but the shading is leaking in some areas along the image, and the nose needs to be colored in. If you ever need any help, don't hesitate to ask! I'd be more than happy to help you out with image creation. Just gimme a shout on my talk page :) <span style="">18:00, 2/23/2017

Heh, I'm not that pleased with the final product. Thanks, though. I can't get to the editing yet, because i'm working on a school project. :( I will try to get to it, though. Thanks again BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 18:31, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

You're amazing at the stripes! Even I can't do stripes properly yet. Mind defining the eye depth?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:19, February 24, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

reuploaded BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 00:58, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink, and give the shading more shape so it isn't a straight line across the body. Curve it along the face and same with the other parts. The apprentice tutorials are lots of help. :) 01:01, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you know how to use the smudge tool? If so, everything still needs to be smudged: the shading, stripes, and white parts. It also appears you're trying to do things on one layer. Do you know how to use layers? If not, I suggest asking one of the other members here to show you how to do an image like that, specifically on a stream. <span style="">01:10, 2/24/2017

The layers were a bit of a hassle. When I tried to use them, my paint tool, Paint.NET shipped it out as one layer. . . so, not really the best option for me. Also I use pixlr and I still haven't got the hang of it. >:( BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 06:06, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you know of a program called Paint Tool SAI? It's actually a lot easier and more nifty to use than Paint.NET. You could download the free trial and get started :) It's a lot better <span style="">13:37, 2/24/2017

reuploaded 17:57 February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd for the kit? The colors look a little off and the images have texture. <span style="">18:53 Fri Feb 24

You nees to use layers, Starlight. Your lineart is blurred in many places. Please, if you need help, don't hesitate to ask. <span style="">19:39, 2/24/2017

Yep, I need help. For some reason I can't use layers primarily because of the weird way my art progam works. I might need to get a different art program. Also the apprentice tutorials aren't really helping me. And before anyone asks, I can get very busy during weekdays. So bombarding me with all you got is not the best way to go. 21:36 Feb 24, 2017

Define the eye depth, and smooth the shading on the front legs and tail

reuploaded --BlazeclawXAshfall (talk) 06:23, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I think the nose pink should be a bit brighter to match the kit's. And smooth out and add some more texture. 16:25, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

There seem to be lighter lines (probably just erased marks) on the stripes that shouldn't be there, and the stripes on the queen and kit don't look quite as blurred, maybe sharpen them a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:36, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

There should only be three colors for the pelt: The white, the base, and the stripes. It appears that you have an additional shade in there within the stripes that shouldn't be there. The texture is also beneath the stripes, placed much closer together and darker in color. I'm gonna guess those lighter lines are texture. If you want the HEX codes for the colors, don't hesitate to ask me. I'm also having trouble seeing the markings at all under the shading. <span style="">22:31 Mon Feb 27

Yep. Can I have the HEX codes? I really need to redo this somehow. . . --BlazeclawXAshfall (talk) 23:31, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Base: 947455 ; Stripes: 3b2618 ; White: FFFFFF ; Ear pink/Nose: 3b2618 ^ There ya go. The texture is two layers with the same color as the stripes with lowered opacity (77%). Hopefully this helps ^^ <span style="">23:43 Mon Feb 27

Can I have the HEX for the eyes? Also, you made a mistake with the Ear pink/Nose part. It's the same as the stripes. :P So maybe the fixed HEX for that as well? BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:04 2/28/17

There also seems to be a layer of sharp lines scattered on top of the image - could you smooth those out?

b58d8e <-- There is the correct one. Sorry 'bout that. My computer is sometimes a little glitchy from the programs I have to run for my research and whatnot. And the eyes are good how they are now, just need a little depth is all. <span style="">01:14 Tue Feb 28

re-up Should I smudge the texture? I'm not sure about that. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:04 2/28/17

Yeah it looks too solid. Also, smudge/blur the ear pink too.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:41, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Heh, it still doesn't look good. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 03:14 3/1/17

Smudge the earpink?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:57, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The stripes on the eyes should be thicker. 21:26, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest, face and paws, and there's some specks of white on the <--- front paw that's not shaded. 22:09, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps smooth/even out the texture, and define the eye depth

Actually, can you help me with the eye depth and earpink part? I probably won't be able to know what you're talking about. . . BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:43 3/2/17

Eye depth means varying the color of the eye, so it's not just flat color. So say, for example, an eye would be a lighter shade up top, and would gradually get darker as it went downward. For the earpink, it looks sharp, as if it was drawn on. Much of the time, we strive to make it more realistic, and we blur/smudge it into the fur to make it look as if it has a tuft of fur in it, or it gradually transitions from earpink to pelt.

Will get to that tomorrow (in my time). It's nighttime here! BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 05:57 3/2/17

re-up BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 23:53 3/2/17

Prickleface (MC) - CBA
~Patch   feather~   14:05, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Could you darken the shading around the belly area and on the left hind leg? (the one that's in the shadows)  ~BlazeclawXAshfur   (User talk:StarlightGirlHSS) 17:53 February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  ~Patch    feather~   13:21, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. Sorry, I uploaded the wrong file. ~Patch   feather~   13:33, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly define the shading on the front legs? <span style="">19:36, 2/28/2017

Re-uploaded. I also darkened the shading on the face a little. ~Patch   feather~   14:38, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">03:57, 3/02/2017

Mist Where Sunlight Shimmers (PH) ~ For Approval
This is my fourth image, first ph. IDK if the speckles are too light...if so, any tips? :D 05:56, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Don't align your images. Also, define the speckles, earpink, and shading. 06:03, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry about the alignment, I am not able to change it on my computer so I have to go to my tablet each time I upload, and it's very late at night so I was lazy. Otherwise, I'll mostly define the shading everywhere but the main body, as I see it perfectly fine there. Tomorrow. And, again, any tips on defining the speckles? 06:21, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe try cdcdcd for the base and ffbc66 for the speckles. 06:34, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. Its looks a bit flat. It is also leaking on the belly by the hind leg. <span style="">14:31 Sat Feb 25

This should have mud on it, if I'm not mistaken. 15:29, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:57, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

If you look at the other prey hunter images, there's a loooooot more mud on it. How's a kitty s'posed to be camouflaged if he's only got a few mud specks on em? :P <span style="">21:10, 2/25/2017

Reuploaded -- 21:45, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the ginger speckles? I can't tell the difference between them and the mud very well

Reuploaded -- 03:03, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add or define some depth to the shading? 05:24, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

can you make the mud more splotchy or add more or smth it looks like brown patches right now 15:31, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:41, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:32, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I can see it fine? Second opinion? 22:17, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to darken it. It would probably also help with it looking flat. <span style="">22:33 Mon Feb 27

Reuploaded -- 23:59, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth? Also idk if it's just me, but the ginger specks seem to be the exact same color throughout and some are untouched by the shading. Is this intentional? If so, I highly suggest moving the specks below the shading layer. <span style="">19:37, 2/28/2017

I'll do that in a bit, but can someone just explain what the shading depth is again? It's not seeming to change. Also, Snow, you said "exact same colour throughout," does that mean you'd like me to change the color of the speckles or just the color of the ones in the shaded areas? Thanks :) 21:47, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

the shading should be much darker near the lineart and gradient out into the base colour, whereas this shading is the same throughout. something like that. 21:53, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:38, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 21:27, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 00:05, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

There's no image? o.O <span style="">03:58, 3/02/2017

What happened....? 04:04, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try reuploading again <span style="">04:11, 3/02/2017

Reuploaded Hopefully it worked -- 04:14, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Beechfur (TC) (Star) ~ CBA
Not sure about this. At least I'm not doing a gray/black cat again. 20:39, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Lighteb him up a bit. I thought he was black. 23:07, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 01:48, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more. Without zooming in, it looks dark gray. 01:53, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 02:31, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tail a bit. 15:26, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading, it looks very flat. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:48, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 02:58, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">03:58, 3/02/2017

Willownose (Queen) ~ For Evaluation
Джулия де Мортон (talk) 12:11, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice. Taper the ends on the stripes a little bit and define the light on the legs. <span style="">15:18 Sun Feb 26

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 15:54, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Add some shading in the ears? 16:30, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 18:20, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and add a little bit of depth? 23:06, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:07, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the face, it kinda looks like there's no shading on the cheek closest to us😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 18:07, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The cheek is fine, but can you define the depth? 11:22, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:24, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the --> back paw? Looks really sharp on my screen

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:46, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Morningflower (Star) - For Evalutation
hecho en photoshop, fue un imagen dificíl... quien inventado esta textura? Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:41, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

realizé había debido reservar esto imagen en la pagína frente... lo siento. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:43, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Please only speak english on this wiki. <span style="">13:05, 2/26/2017

Define/Darken the shading. Very pretty! 16:10, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

This looks beautiful! Could you darken the pupils, they look grey to me. — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  16:18, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you all. I darkened the shading. I'll darken the pupils later. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 02:37, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading needs to be darkened more. I cannot see it. <span style="">02:52, 2/27/2017

how's this? Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 13:51, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define it a bit more. And don't forget to say reuploaded or some variation of that every time you re-upload it. 16:24, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I think the whole image should be darkened a bit to match the other Morningflower images. — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  16:46, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink?

I reuploaded it and did everything everyone suggested :] Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:25, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

I really think the shading needs to be darkened quite a lot more. <span style="">19:38, 2/28/2017

Can you darken or add shading if there's any? I can't make it out😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 21:20, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Broken Foot, don't repeat what other have said. As for the image, define the earpink. 23:27, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Is it against the rules or something? Anyways, maybe darken the pupil, it doesn't look exactly black.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:40, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

I'm not entirely sure it's against the rules, but it's a bit ... offputting (is that the right word?) to have something be said twice during the same re-uploading period. <span style="">03:44, 3/01/2017

I reuploaded! I'm sure Broken Foot just accidentally didn't see the comment above... ;w; anyway, I darkened the shading!! I apologize massively if it seemed like I didn't do so previously- I really tried ! ouo maybe it's because of this stupid tortoiseshell pattern... Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:22, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Gonna have to ask you to darken the shading again. It's visible, but barely 22:13, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Parsnip (KP) - CBA
Yes, he is a Savannah hybrid <3 I saw his description and couldn't resist. <span style="">23:46 Mon Feb 27

I love the spots. What tool did you use to make them? :) Can you smoothen out the shading? 23:50, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the haunch furthest from us? Eaglestorm1 (talk) 23:51, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks (: Sadly there's no trick with custom brushes on this one. Just a 3px brush with pen pressure using a tablet, and a reference image of a Savannah cat. No smudging required either 'cause of the short fur ^^ <span style="">00:50 Tue Feb 28

Damn what a fine kitty! CBA? <span style="">03:59, 3/02/2017

Star (KM) ~ For Approval
ehhhh...

This is probably tiny but the chin on the other image is orange. 00:27, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Lighten the light in the eyes a bit- Wildthorn34 (talk) 01:27, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 20:13, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The eyes are the same colors as the CG image, and they're above the shading and everything, so I'd rather not lighten them.

Define the light on the front leg furthest from us? <span style="">04:00, 3/02/2017

That's some fine stripes. Mind smoothing out the shading on the front leg closest to us?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:56, March 2, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded

Robinstar (L) ~ For Evaluation
Eaglestorm1 (talk) 00:55, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth and the eye depth?

Smooth the shading and define it on the tail. <span style="">01:15 Tue Feb 28

Re-up Eaglestorm1 (talk) 01:31, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

For a beginner, this is not bad. Blur the texture a bit?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 02:17, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

May I get a second opinion. I am pretty sure you don't have to blur texture... 02:35, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading on the belly, legs, and chest. I think the texture is fine. 02:39, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

I had agreed with Wolf, I'm pretty sure Troll does it. Thanks Vet :3 Eaglestorm1 (talk) 02:43, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Make the tail more ginger; I honestly thought it was light brown/golden-brown. 03:44, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

textures fine but it's supposed to be a bit soft like fur, so maybe blur (or smudge) it a small bit. it is a little sharp. 20:47, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

This needs to be reserved.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:54, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Broken, it is reserved <span style="">22:22, 3/02/2017

Spiderpelt (W) ~ For Approval
23:37, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Maybe define the shading on the four paws a little bit? 23:40, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  23:45, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail. 23:50, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

 Reups  23:53, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Lighen him up. He looks too dark to be silver. Also, define the tail shading more, as well the earpink. 23:57, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  00:12, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head? 16:09, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

 Reups  22:57, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell if that dark spot by the stomach is shading or a black stripe? If so, could you define which it is? Also define the shading depth overall <span style="">04:02, 3/02/2017

Reups 20:31, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Idk if its just me, but the whole image looks blurry? It just looks a little odd with the lineart sharp, and everything else blurred, but idk. Also could you define/sharpen the earpink a smidge? <span style="">20:43, 3/02/2017

Reups 21:07, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Thrushwing (Q) ~ For Approval
02:45, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Wildthorn34 (talk) 02:47, March 1, 2017 (UTC) Ohh! do i like i think its fine but add a little color to the nose.

Idk if it's me but the right eye looks like it's a lazy eye, maybe shift it <- this way a bit more? 02:48, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

i think the eye looks ok, can i get a second opinion? and then nose isn't supposee to be filled on these blanks. 14:27, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eye is fine. And the nose on the queen blanks does not need to be filled in unless they're specifically said to have a color in their nose, like bright pink <span style="">14:39, 3/01/2017

Could you smudge that black patch on her leg some and perhaps lighten the shading on her face just a tiny bit <span style="">20:44, 3/02/2017

Deerfoot (DF) ~ For Approval
First Dark Forest image. Not entirely happy with this, but, oh well. 03:04, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's me or not, but the brown almost looks reddish?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 03:11, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded. Color picked from Spikefur. 03:15, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

(Ignore me if its fine) But define the shading on  the tail?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:55, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded. Btw, do the eyes seem washed out to anyone else? They're bright on the file, but whenever I reupload, they turn to a pale, almost white color. 15:43, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I'm seeing an almost white color on my phone.

Reuploaded. This is the best I can get it. 20:38, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the brown parts a bit? <span style="">20:45, 3/02/2017

Reuploaded. 21:01, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (RC) (Star) ~ For Approval
18:00, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading everywhere but the front half of the cat? <span style="">19:24, 3/01/2017

Darken the shading. I could barely tell it was there. If anyone disagrees, you have way better eyesight than me. (most likely) :P BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 03:14 3/1/17

I can actually see the shading just fine? o.O You may need to mess with your computer settings. <span style="">04:04, 3/02/2017

Re-ups 20:20, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Brownpaw (Star) ~ For Approval
I'm so proud of this pattern <span style="">23:02, 3/02/2017

This is beautiful! Maybe expand the shading along the tail. 23:05, March 2, 2017 (UTC)


 * Thank you! But tbh I'd rather not, or it'd contradict my light source. I use this source on all of my images. If I could get a second onion on that that'd be great <span style="">23:06, 3/02/2017

I think it's fine. But besides that, can you smoothen out the shading on the front paws? 23:17, March 2, 2017 (UTC)