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Thornclaw (Alt. A) - CBA
He has one for the kit, and the cite is real this time. I double-checked with some people in chat. Described as ginger. Comments? 19:04, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. 19:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color more ginger-y. He looks brown, and define the shading and highlights. 19:09, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And fix the earpink on both ears. The pink is covering little bits of lineart. 19:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink's match and redder 21:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I should know it's real, I added it. XD anyway, there's lighter ginger on his face, so maybe make the body that colour? Skt Spoilers... 22:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. You have barely any shading, there's no light source, there's miscoloured lineart, and I can hardly see the stripes. You have one week. 02:35, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

And just a warning, it's currently being discusses whether Brackenfur and Thornclaw's main description should be ginger, so this may end up being declined.... we'll have to wait and see for other's opinions on the discussion, but technically since they were first mentioned as ginger, it's quite likely they'll be changed. 05:56, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, why would it be declined? If it was changed, couldn't this just become the normal apprentice? Skt Spoilers... 06:02, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Not for sure. More likely that the normal apprentice would be tweaked, as it's an extremely simple tweak. Eh, I don't know, we'll decide when and if it happens. 11:12, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Euploadedray(Re-uploaded) Good? 12:06, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the fur more orange to match the kit better? 19:59, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and make the stripes match the kit. ^^ Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 22:42, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear, and then smudge it and make the color match the kit. Also define the shading. 05:14, 29, 06, 2012

Define the ear-pink  16:02, June 29,2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the ear. 16:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add eye depth. 16:46, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the kit? 14:32, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, Sky already said that. 14:44, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I thought Boss said Re-Uploaded after it. e.e 14:46, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Yes, I was caught in the east coast storm so I was left without cable for the past two days. And Re-uploaded.-- 18:01, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think that this about 80% done. Does anyone else agree? 18:31, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't count but, yes. Fill the earpink in more. 17:00, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

This looks pretty 80% to me; heading changed. Blur the shading tons, and make the colour and stripes match the kit. 17:03, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes match the other apprentice image? 00:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? ☯ ~ S t o n e c l a <font color="#6E6E6E" face="Comic Sans MS">w <font color="#523014" face="Comic Sans MS">~ <font color="#000000" face="Comic Sans MS">☯ 06:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but my dad put stupid restraints on the computer so I can only access it between 8 A.M.-8 P.M. for 1 hour. x.x-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:58, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on his ear. 13:02, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink more pink like the kit, and fill the earpink in the whole ear and then smudge/blur it. 15:01, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:33, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- 17:34, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes so it matches the kit? 17:36, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up into the ear. 21:14, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more and smoothen out the highlight on the haunch. 23:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I just realized I forgot to define the shading, so I'll do that now. x.x-- 13:34, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and thicken the stripes a tad. 20:15, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:48 Mon Jul 9

Blur the stripes just a bit?-- 02:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit too. 02:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll thicken the stripes when someone tells me how.-- 12:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Excuse me? You do know it's a privilege to be able to do this image. It's not your own personal right. You being rude and demanding for someone to tell you how to do something is only going to get this declined. You could've said, "I'm sorry, I don't know how, can someone help me?" and we'd be willing and glad. But now I'm debating on not helping you and letting you figure it out for yourself. If you don't understand me, just re-read what you've written and think about how extremely rude and degrading it is. 16:31, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And Boss, what you said was uncalled for. Part of making these images is doing them on your own. We're not going to tell you how to do something. e.e

Sorry. It's just been my life has been a bit hectic lately, so I've been in a more grumpy and demanding mood. My apologies to all that I may have offended.-- 13:05, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

-I'm a little scared to comment but...- Define the shading some more, and smudge the earpink. It looks too straight-edged to me. 14:36, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Cranky people. XD To thicken the stripes, just run your brush over them so that the stripes themselves increase in size. If you're matching the kit, you also might want to take your brush and connect some of them. It'll take a bit of time, though. Breeze whisker  17:45, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hope it worked...-- 12:43, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Toward the back area, near the shoulder and on the tail on --> this side, the stripes blend in with the shading...fix that :3 13:33, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes more and smudge the earpink into the ear. -- 19:01, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and make sure that the stripes show through the shading on the back; maybe try shading with a different color? 13:33, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:40, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more please. <span style="">13:00 Sun Jul 15

Re-Uploaded-- 13:17, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading, and darken the stripes. 23:24, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:06, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. -- 07:47, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 20:30, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes on his back, they get lost in the shading. 02:37, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

This may just be my monitor, but I can't see the earpink very well. Could you lighten it some? 20:49, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's just your monitor. I took it straight from the earpink template thingy.-- 21:46, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 21:52, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and enlarge the "highlights" and make the stripes go all the way to the edge of his back and tail. 04:40, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad more to match the alt. kit. 06:10, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Boss, are you still working on this? If you are, the ginger seems a little too...saturated, I believe is the right word. Did you try asking Rowan for the hex code for the base pelt? Also, define the stripes on the belly/midriff area, as they get lost in the shading.

Re-Uploaded I hope I blurred the highlights right...-- 12:32, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more, and possibly change the shading color as it's probably that that makes the color not match. <span style="">07:49, 23, 07, 2012

Define the "highlight" on his shoulder, or at least make it match the other in colour. 15:26, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changes aren't showing I think.-- 21:57, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the shoulder a bit. 16:03, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define it on the tail. 17:23, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 22:22, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight a little. 23:00, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Dullen the highlights and define the shading. 00:29, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail highlight. 17:20, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

This has been up for a month; it's declined. Any user with an open slot may take over. 03:47, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Taking over, re-uploaded First time I've ever taken over a charart 8D 12:47, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the entire ear.-- 12:52, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

It does fill the whole ear, it's just the way it's smudged, but I'll change it if someone else agrees owo 12:55, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and the stripes don't exactly match his alt kit image. 13:03, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

The base color doesn't seem quite right... it could just be the shading. but I suggest making it more reddish and possibly darker. o3o <span style="">06:17, 27, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded 07:57, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yeah...I disliked the shading owo 08:19, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 22:29, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make his stripes and shadingm ore...ginger?

I'm not sure how you can fix this, but the stripes look pixilated to me. Kind of. I'm not 100% sure how to describe it, but they just look...off. (ugh that sounded so mean, trust me I'm not trying to be I just don't know how to describe what I mean...) 05:07, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Okay, the whole image has been restarted, the stripes were pixel-y. owo 10:52, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 11:55, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 01:02, August 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 08:40, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a smidge and make the base color more... orangy and darker. Also just my preference but tint the shading. <span style="">03:07, 05, 08, 2012

Re-uploaded <span style="">06:37 Tue Aug 7

CBA? 06:46, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Lo) ~ For Approval
All colors come from Paleh, including the way the shading is. Stripes...they dun like me. e.e

The cream color // the stripes don't match very well. The way they look, I mean. Otherwise, I <3 this <333 Camrynn 12:14, August 5, 2012 (UTC)

The colors are right from Paleh. Actually, I asked her about the stripes, and she said they match well enough placement wise. I'm going to ask her later how she smudged them/made 'em less straight/whatever.

Wow, this is flawless, may I just congratulate you, Skye? ♫Feather nose♫ ♥♥Rarity Lover♥♥ 09:54, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. 13:25, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading in general. 00:38, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Re-did the shading.