Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 71

Scorchfur ~ Silver Nomination
I remember putting this one up before, I can't expand anything or find any quotes but if anything needs to be re-worded or flow better than I can do that. Comments? 21:10 Wed May 2

Can you expand Battles of The Clans any?♘ Duck Splash ♞ 21:15, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think so. 21:47 Wed May 2

I'm probably nitpicking, but could you rephrase Fading Echoes? 22:09, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yes ma'am I can and I did. (Nitpicking is fine, we want quality articles don't we?) :) 20:45 Thu May 3

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Sandypaw ~ Silver Nomination
Re-wrote history, and expanded as much as I could. Comments?

I'm pretty sure Patchfoot, Fallowfern and Petalnose didn't actually leave, they just talked about it, so that might need removing.(Look on Page 73 of After the Flood) 06:15, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it was implied that they left. (I know what page it is, I have the book. >.>) I think it's fine, imho.

I rephrased it, since I'm not really in the mood to argue. =.=

Perhaps detail the section on AtF, in the history. Exactly what was his reaction to those thinking about leaving? And why were those cats thinking about leaving? 19:13, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

I can't detail it, Stone. There's nothing more there to detail. XD

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