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Snaketail (E) - Tweaked
Can someone help me get rid of the waste? :3. It's tweaked, honest xD. Orginal artist was Ashshadow' Neede shading blurred and gray flecks on chin. Elorisa  01:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll hlp you get rid of the waste. One moment please. 01:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some white parts on the tail, and can you blur the shading a bit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There ya go Elo =3 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there, *Was requested to get rid of re-appearing waste* One seccond, then,. ^^ . 02:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks really blurred to me; fix that? 02:37 Tue Dec 6

But the lineart isn't blurred; I checked xD. Before I reuploaded. -- Elorisa   13:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It sure looks blurred though.... And there's still empty white specks on the tail and back ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:12, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is fine, I think. Blur the highlights. 18:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is blurred. I don't care that you say it isn't...it looks odd like that. Can you fix it, please? 23:09, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't even know how I'd fix it...>.> -- Elorisa   03:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it not so dark all around the lineart. And if you truly can't do that then maybe you should withdraw this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:57, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

So I'm supposed to withdraw something because I can't do something with it...>.>. I'll just redo it. ;-; -- Elorisa   21:37, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. If you're incapable of doing what is needed, you shouldn't be working on the charart. And do you mean re-tweak it, or redo it completely? Because you still do need permission to redo completely. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Do not take on chararts that are beyond your ability. You slow down the project in doing so. Sorry if it sounds mean, but it's true. Practice chararts on your own time and then take on harder chararts in the project, but for now stick to what you can do. 16:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I retweaked it :3 -- Elorisa   21:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's a bit better. Make the gray specks smaller and blur them a bit more, and there's some white on the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I did her warrior, might as well do her kit as well. Fixed shading and highlights. OA was Pantherstorm. I did my best to get all of the waste off, if you see anymore I'll get it. Comments? 20:31, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and erase all the waste (by the tail and paws) 20:35 Tue Dec 6

Make the earpink a bit bigger on both ears. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:27, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't I not allowed to change things that weren't down for tweaking? 21:55, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Why wouldn't you change them? Might as well do it now; if it's not done now, it'll just have to be tweaked again later. 22:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry, I thought there was a rule or something, unless it was changed. Fixed earpink, shading, and waste. 20:34, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

You have to re-upload this over her kit image so it will work properly on the charart template. ;3 21:53, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. 20:12, December 8, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Brighten the eyes. 23:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste under the back paw. 23:48 Thu Dec 8

Can you darken the shading? 61.68.145.227

^^^ That was me. 07:18, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Re-Uploaded - Excuse the shading job. I've just started using layers and all, so I'm still getting the hang of it. Changes not showing. xP 14:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the ear pink. It seems to have blended in with the pelt. xD 21:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And erase the waste. 23:10 Sat Dec 10

Haven't worked on it yet, but the changes are now showing. 166.249.104.114 23:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There's still some waste. (I'm assuming that was you up there, Shadey) 06:30 Mon Dec 12

Maybe it's just my computer but the eyes look a bit dark and the white pixel looks grayish. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:56, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Waste erased, eye fixed, earpink fixed. Changes aren't showing. 21:21, December 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Millie (KP) - Redone
I dislike this. Original artist was Quailflight, and it needed to match. Comments? 16:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I like the stripes :3 20:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base image a bit before you darken the shading. Blur the stripes a tiny bit. 23:15 Sat Dec 10

Maybe make the ear-pink more pale pink; it's lookin' kinda purplish - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The earpink's the same colour as the other images' earpinks, so I'm not changing. 19:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading or make it more noticeable; it looks like she has none at all. 02:42, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Adderfang-(W) Tweaked


This was just a simple tweak, really, it was(Even if he IS on the re-do list.) Okay, so I did his deputy, and i felt that i should do his warrior image.....so, i just made him mottled. OA was Honeyfyr, and was then re-done by Frostheart<3 and i just made him mottled, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mottles match the deputy image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

pfffft, tell her how to do it, not just tell to match it better xD - 01:06, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well I would, except I don't know how to do those kind of mottles..... I don't know what you'd have to do to fix them. D: I just know they don't match right now. Maybe add more of them and darken the light ones so they're not so bright? I don't know. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well she should know, since she was the one who made the other image xD - 01:45, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, yes, yes i know :3 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:51, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Stormtail (W) - tweaked
Reposting, OA=Echomist - 01:10, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the earpink and blur it a little more. Much better than his old image 01:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and blur the shading a lot, it's blotchy 16:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - whatchu talking about, Sand? - 18:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, and you only have to blur the shading a tad. 19:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I just did, and I cant blur it anymore on pixlr without it being blotchy - 19:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

So, you posted it again. 8D the earpink might need to be reddened a tad. :3 Sky ☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 02:27, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nettleclaw (W)~ Redone
It was listed for the stripes to be redone, and the shdaing was gross and there was blurred line art so i redid it. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 22:43, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my gosh, Icy, he looks amazing. Define the shading just a TAD. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the ear-pink and make it smaller. 01:12 Mon Dec 12

Snowfur (W) - Redone
OA was Bramble. The shading and the ear-pink had to be redone and honestly, that's half the charart, so I just redid it. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:48, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shoulder highlight bigger. 02:43, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste under the chin and by the ear, I'm pretty sure, and blur the shading even more please 04:06, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:17, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Jingo (KP) - Redone
Original artist was either Insaneular or Darkhallows and it needed to be a little less green. =3 02:47, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you bring the pupils down? She looks like she's about to pass out. 02:53, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x3 02:59, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading o.o 03:04, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to be blunt but the eyes are kinda scary o.o Maybe take them off of another image, like Smudge or Sharpclaw? Otherwise this is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:16, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Creepy eyes are so lovely though. xD Shading's been lightened and the eyes were redone =3 04:30, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dunno if the changes are showing, but if they aren't, make the pupil a bit bigger. 06:15 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded. Ack, eyes.... 23:19, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shnuky (KP) ~ Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this. She needed to be gray, not brown. OA= Sandy, tweaked by Ivystripe. Do you like the texture I gave it? xD I had fun making this one. Comments? 04:06, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Great, but she's cross eyed. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Heheh. Oops. =3 04:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mah, I hate it. XD jk. Blur the shading. Sky ☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (Ki) - Tweaked
Added tufted ears, darkened the shading to match the deputy image and made the earpink less neon. The tufts came straight from Redtail's kit image, so please don't ask me to change them. OA was Echoheart. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:48, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (W) - Tweaked
He looked less blue with blotchy shadings, now he looks like redone (its not!) Darkhallows is OA ,14:07,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the paws and blur all the shading. 20:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also darken the shading on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:16, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (r) ~ Redone
Redone to match elder. OA was Flamingomom. 00:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't he supposed to have a shorter snout? And define the shading  00:28, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Tumblekit (Ki) - Redone
Ok, I found another short-haired RiverClan cat and I've put his alt on this list for tweaking as well. Among that, he was only described as a tabby and he was depicted as gray, which is not our default tabby color. Not sure who the OA was, but we've got Sandstar12 and Bramble. I really like this, I enjoy not having to copy a pattern. Comments for improvement? 00:25, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

B'aaw! Make < this ears ear-pink smaller. 01:29 Tue Dec 13