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Runningwind (Ki) ~ Redone
do not ask me to define the earpink it's the same colour as the warrior okay. Anyways, redone for stripes. Cooments? 08:58 Sun Dec 16

Can you maybe add a bit more stripes to him? I know that since it's a kit blank, it would be hard, so if you can't that's fine. 20:54, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

OMG so adorable<3333 define the earpink. 03:51, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

If I define the earponk, it will not match his warrior and apprentice. The earpink can straight from the warriors .xcf and I'm not changing it if I can help it. 03:56 Mon Dec 17

I think it has plenty enough stripes Misty, except on the leg.... that seems to be lacking a bit. 17:23, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded some stripes for you runningkit 01:07 Wed Dec 19

earponk xD Could you define the shading between the front legs a touch? 21:33, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (W) - Redone
My Brighty! <3 I reworked the patches, stripes, and shading. Though it's the same image, probably enough to call it a redo. OA was me 00:19, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Shading seems kinda flat. Define it?

Re-uploaded. I hope I don't turn her gray again... 00:31, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks grey again. Expand the highlights, especially on the face and shoulder. 05:50, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:37, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

She's still looking gray....why not try shading the ginger and the white on two different layers? (that's what I do with black and white cats)

It already is... 21:20, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Ah, okay. Then perhaps lighten the shading on the white? (sorry, didn't know that ^^;;)

Do you think the stripes could be blurred a bit more when they touch the white? The other images tend to do that. 21:35, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think I can make the white shading much lighter... It's already at like 17% opacity... And I kinda want to keep the stripes and maybe nominate the others for a quick tweak. I think it makes them looks less paintbrushy, but I can change it if others think I should 00:10, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with them looking paintbrushy on the others, but honestly, if you're gonna change the stripes, could you change the pattern please? This honestly isn't natural. 00:53, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

I really have to agree with Paleh on that note. I /do/ like how the stripes are, however. They're really neat. o3o

Re-uploaded I liked the stripes the old way. They made her look unique 03:16, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but (at least on the tail) these still don't look natural.... plus, they wouldn't be able to go onto the white. They'd have to stop where the ginger stops. 03:27, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think that there could be a bit of overlap, like how tabby stripes sometimes cross the pale patches over the throat. I modeled her slightly after this 04:06, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

They come on the chest because it's pale. They can't be on white though. For tabby and whites or ginger and whites it's simply not possible to overlap. 18:53, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think her entire image set should be redone...the stripes on all of them are overblurred, especially the queen. Plus, I don't believe that the patches are natural... I dunno. I just think they should be redone to be a little more natural... (or tweaked? )

So, you think that there should be more patches rather than the main one in the middle of her back? 21:57, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, that's what I think, yes. I dunno what everyone else thinks.

Re-uploaded How's this look? 23:13, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh my goodness, I blood love this!! 8DD Just darken the shading on the ginger a bit, and maybe make the earpink less bubblegum pink. 01:13, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:22, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Could you thin out the shading along her haunch and neck a bit? Holy StarClan this is beautiful<3333 01:51, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks, Papa Leggy! 01:55, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Ha, I told you that you were the dad! Shading on the ginger on the shoulder seems kinda oddly shaped. Like it doesn't go along with the ginger on the white. Could you try and fix that? 03:38, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

What? No. I'm the waifuu here. And could you enlarge the "highlight" on her head a little? 04:04, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded @Papa Leggy, lol i forgot to turn on the white shading so there technically wasn't a highlight 04:46, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be light grey and add the pale under belly ( I think I should've just redone it...it barely matches. ) I also redid the shading because it was icky. OA was moi 03:36 Tue Dec 18

Define the shading a little more? 05:49, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:25 Tue Dec 18

Oh crud, just realised I've actually got three tweaks up... I'd forgotten about little Runningkit up there... So... withdrawing this so as to not break tweaking rules. 10:49 Tue Dec 18

Okay, we're back up. o3o 11:32 Wed Dec 19

Do you think you could blur the stripes a bit, and maybe lighten them? They really stick out against the pelt a lot. 21:31, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, and they a look a bit too paint brushed on. Can you maybe sharpen them a bit? 17:58, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) ~ Tweaked
redid the shading (again).

Lighten it a bit more, blur the haunch shading, and define the shoulder and leg shading. 22:26, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This looks better in PS. .-.

Make the earpink a tad less neon? 22:41, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

You're gonna seriously shoot me for this, but the shading needs to be defined more now. 03:43, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Frostfur (E) - Tweaked
Had the file for this still, so I just redid the shading (and earpink). Needed to be lightened and shading defined, and images needed to match. Last OA was me, comments? 20:41, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

I can't quite tell if the light is coming towards the face or the back and define the bottom of the ear-pink a bit more; it looks kinda whispy 00:15, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

The light is coming from the top right corner, and I personally think the earping is fine. It's supposed to be furry there. 00:51, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading on the tail and define it farther down the back of the neck? 04:08, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Snowkit (OS) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for shading. 00:20, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define it, plz. Snowkit<3

Re-uploaded. 12:25, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little tiny bit of waste near the neck, tail and head. :) 21:14, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. skt smash 22:12, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (W) - Tweaked
Ehhh. OA was Dawnleaf with a tweak by me. 01:03, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a bit purple/pink to me... Can you fix that? o3o (but if it was intended or something, then it's fine) 02:18, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Tints are fine. They don't need to be changed. 02:51, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

I have to agree with Paleh on that note. ( that's cool how'd you do that? o.o  )

Actually, though the tint's fine, could you lighten the whole thin a bit more? 03:25, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:35, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a little bit 21:15, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'm of the opinion that the tint could be lessened a little bit ouo 22:14, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Sheepy. Although, it doesn't need to be lessened /that/ much. Only a tiny bit.

Webfoot (A) - Redone
Lol this sucks but it had to be redone to match the warrior which Berry did a great job in making the pattern amazing in which I couldn't match. But I tried and I'll probably end up redoing it anyways ouo Comments? 01:22, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeeeeaaah.... *cough* still really doesn't match. Plus it's a bit messy. 06:20, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think that you blurred too much. And though I don't really know for sure, I think that the other images are just smudged, not blurred. 17:47, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudtail (KP) ~ Tweaked
OA be Loonie. Made him lighter.

Dawnflower (A) ~ Tweaked
I made tried to get her tone to match the other images. (I know she probably looks t o3o OA was Ice throat with a redo by Wildheart. .-. 04:56, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little and blur the shading just a little tiny bit more. Looks prettyful :) 21:17, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Flowerstar (W) - Tweaked
Alrighty, I... added a few more stripes here and there, redid the shading, by changing the light source, and fixed the ear-pink and defined the bottom of it. I'll probably end up making the ear-pink darker. OA was me. Comments? 05:06, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

White's starting to look a tad gray.

Re-uploaded 05:12, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still looking gray and needs to be teinted a lot more. 06:18, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:44, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Tint it even more, expand the highlights, blur the patches, and make the stripes match better. 20:27, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try to give that shading the red look the leader has? 23:07, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Snooky(KP) - Redone
OA is Iceheart I think, redone for looking gray, comments? I failed. x3 21:05, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the patches on the back, they look a little pixelly. Cute! :) 21:19, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the little patches a bit bigger/thicker to match? 22:01, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:32, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like there's a little bit of waste at the very bottom, on the right. 23:28, December 21, 2012 (UTC)

Foxheart(W) - Tweaked
Latest OA is me, needed shading lightened, and stripes sharpened. Comments? 21:10, December 21, 2012 (UTC)