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Stick (Cat) (W) - Redone
Original artist was Goldenpaw, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 18:09, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you defin the tail and haunch shading a tad? Nicely done as always :) 18:11, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the ear and erase the two single pixels that point out. (If you know what I mean). 00:12, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, too~ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 04:42, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:55, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 07:04, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred as much as I could. 17:13, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink/Make it stand out more. Great work! 07:51, 27, 03, 2012

Reuploaded Wait for changes... 20:00, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I thinks there's a tiny bit of waste above his ripped ear...but it could just be my phone. Also, blur the shading on the shoulder a bit~ 03:11, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Palefoot (W) - Redone
OA was Rainbreath with a redo by me. Redone mostly because I didn't like to stripes. Classic tabby fail. 15:29, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink and (maybe) blur the stripes? 08:20, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, but I'd rather not blur the stripes. 23:48, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a little more? 21:22, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:41, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Mitzi (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Hawktalon. Redone because unrealistic stripes and in my opnion didn't look like a tortoiseshell. Comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:55, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the ear pink? If it's there, define it please. 13:59, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Hold up, Elo, the whole tortie description has been thrown into question. This might have to be changed. 21:33, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Should I change it now? or what? x.x.  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 00:22, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' on chat last night we established her real description, a two-toned gray and white cat. comments? C: -- Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 20:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudges ever so slightly so she doesn't look prickly. Very pretty! 22:04, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful job, Elo~ 01:17, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (D) - Redone
Its isn't something extra...needed to match elder...OA is Bracken-. ,19:54,March 26,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 19:02, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded ,18:59,March 27,2012

Define/sharpen the highlights c: 03:15, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  11:14, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Willowshine (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to look like the MCA image. Man, this was a difficult pattern to transfer onto a kit. DX 01:27, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. :3 But shouldn't the nose be black? Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 02:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

No, not all dark gray cats have black noses. 02:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * derp* XP Blur the earpink then? C: Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 07:58, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  19:44, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more >3< 00:48, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing a tthe moment, dear. 01:00, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I know, but I checked the latest image uploaded and looked at it. 22:49, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Princess (KP) ~ Redone
They said I could be anything. So I became a pointed tabby. Haha, anyway, this is how I've always imagined Princess, actually. Comments? 02:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad? 02:24, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

FINALLY A POINTED TABBY! *celebrates* Add some shading to her back paw. 03:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And color in the tag. XD 07:21, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It was colored in, but I've defined it witha different shade. 00:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. <3 This is gorgeous Shelly! 06:45, 29, 03, 2012

Didn't see this until just now. Sorry, I'll have to do this later, I'm on my way out at the moment. I'll be gone all weekend, so bare with me. 21:51, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Mistkit (SC) (Ki) - Redone
....... I burned it. owo 'Tis Chubacca's supposed daughter. This is what happens when you tell me to make a floofy character at 3am. XD Anyways, shading and fur needed to be redone. No clue who the OA was since Loonie renamed the image. Yes I'm gonna crop it, yes I know it's tinted blue, no I'm not gonna change that. Other comments? 21:14, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, that might be a bit much... tone it down a bit, eh? 21:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Kinkfur's just as bad.... it's just cause this is a smaller blank. I'd really rather not, but if others agree I will. 21:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but I agree with Shelly. It's too much and almost overwhelming to look at 22:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

OA was me. She does kinda look like a silver pinecone xP Maybe add some fuzz between her ears? Kinky has it. 22:08, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should keep her that fluffy. And I quote: "The kit's pale grey pelt was as spiky as a pinecone." 23:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just crop the image O_o 23:03, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno about toning it down...but blur the earpink? Lucky she's not an apprentice, lol Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:40, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think the floof should stay, personally. It looks great. 8D Can you define/darken the shading a smidge? 23:46, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Her eyes look purple. Is that just my computer? o3o Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 06:14, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Such mixed answers..... seems like more people want me to keep it if you count Scarlet's comment as saying yes, as she actually is described as looking like a pinecone. xD And the eyes were meant to be blue, but they ended up a bit farther towards puprle than I meant. XD fixed that. 14:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

You shrank the image size, not the canvas size. Guess you're going to have to revert to the previous version and try again. 17:13, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the Wiki is being screwy and doing a bunch of dumb resizing to images. I checked and she didn't shrink it. ^^  18:27, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

So flooffy *0* Define the shading~<3 02:32, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Fallow, I can't define the shading much more than this on such a small blank. 02:58, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki) - Tweaked
Original artist was me, just needed to be lightened. Comments? 21:48, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

The gray doesn't quite match the warrior...color pick, perhaps? 13:32, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a wee bit moar. 13:51 Fri Mar 30

'Reuploaded. 16:37, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Redone
OA's were Cloudskye, Elorisa. Needed to be redone to match the kit ~. Comments? :3 22:26, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that ear pink. 22:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the stripes on the apprentice more closely. They need to be darker, more textured, and they need to conform to the shape of his body. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

His main coloring needs to be a bit darker to match as well. Also, try to match the ear pink on the other images and don't have it so low that it leaks into his forehead. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Uh Shelly, the apprentice is being redone to match the kit. 01:31 Thu Mar 29

The stripes don't match the kit, either, and the kit is essentially the apprentice with thinner stripes. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. (Sorry if what Shelly already said covers this). 06:41, 29, 03, 2012

Re-uploaded. I don't think the changes are showing. I fixed the stripes and they match a whole lot better. Blurred the earpink as well. 19:16, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the ear pink more triangular and less neon-y. 02:26, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
...I don't have much to say about this one. OA was Echomist, and the highlights needed to be blurred and toned down. File changes aren't showing yet, I assume. 23:32, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Nice :3 Blur the highlights. 23:34, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

...File changes aren't showing yet. This is the old version. =3 23:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Oh..I'm sorry Dx. 23:38, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Crowfrost (W) ~ Redone
My kitty, Homer! 8D The patches were oversmudged and blurred, and the pattern in general isn't possible...or something like that. OA be Sandstar12, with a tweak by Cloudskye. ^^ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 05:59, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! I like this much better. XD Define the shading a bit. 09:29, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you shrink and redden the ear pink? Daaaaang, Skt. Wonderful job~ 21:56, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading too. 21:57, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't redden it cause black and grey cat tend to have brownish skin (their ears, at the very least) but I'll change it if'n anyone else wants me to. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 08:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the lineart a bit blurred? Sorry if it isn't...!S p o [[User talk:.Spottedclaw 23:39, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

It can't be, I pit the lineart on a seperate layer. O.o Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  23:46, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (W) - Redone
As promised, I killed the stripes. >:D I think I may just like Bumble more now. Wow so many OAs on this.... Nightshine with a tweak by Leggy, then by Trolly, then by Loonie. Stripes were unrealistic. 14:29, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot the torn ear. XP Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  01:06, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks tinted pink, make it more grey? 19:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Nowhere does it say what color the shading has to be, Leafstrike. It's artist's choice. Oh, yeah. Did I mention how epic this is? 02:31, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - D'oh, forgot the ear. xD And I always tint the shading on my images, and I've said countless times, I'm not changing it. I'm sick of people asking me to. 02:47, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (SC) - Redone
OA was Shimmerpool with a redo by me. Color and stripes just looked off.... I took the colors from Russetfur's apprentice. Comments? 15:11, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 22:18, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes probably aren't showing 01:04, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Alt. W) - Tweaked
I just used the lineart from his warrior, and redid that shading because it sucked. OA was me so it's still a tweak. 23:46, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (A) ~ Redone
Had to match the warrior. OA is Icethroat, then I redid it in the new blanks. I liked my old one better, but oh well. This really is not good. =( Comments? 00:11, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the back of the haunch marking a little bigger like it is on the warrior. 01:07, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Shorty (W) ~ Redone
It reeked of triangle tabby. OAs were Icestorm and Mistystar. "Shorty?! Could a shorty do this?! What else you want to call me: a half-pint bean-sprout midget?! I'm still growing you backwater desert idiots!" --Edward Elric to the people of Liore in Fullmetal Alchemist episode 1 Anyway, comments? 01:36 Fri Mar 30

OuO Awesomnesss~ Could you blur or smudge the stripes a bit? 02:37, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies Tatum <33 03:52 Fri Mar 30

Can you blur the shading? 8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 15:11, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:54 Fri Mar 30

It's a neat addition, though could you remove that alchemist tattoo (I forgot what it's called) on his leg? I don't think it would be possible for any cat would have that. xD 00:33, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Well I've seen cats that sort of have a T shape on there leg. I would kinda like to keep it. *makes me feel nerdy* X3 00:56 Sat Mar 31

Make it just slightly less precise and uniform? It really does look like a tatoo right now. xD 02:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Hopefully changes will show. 03:00 Sat Mar 31

I'm not sure if changes are showing, but the stripes still look a bit to perfect. Blur them? Also, blur the shading~ 03:58, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This is as blurred as it will go. 04:02 Sat Mar 31

Oakheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
OA was me. Simple as that. Again, actually check the file history if the changes aren't showing. 21:03, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make le earpink bigger <3 22:52 Fri Mar 30

Re-uploaded. Changes...y u no show? =/ 22:56, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. Awesome job! <span style="">04:48, 31, 03, 2012

Princess (Q) ~ Declined
Ewwie.. >.> Tried to match Shelly's awesomeness, but I still think I'm a bit erm, off.. :/ Comments? 01:58, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Didn't Shelly say she wanted Princess' images? Or was she only talking about the kittypet? 02:00, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Misty. I looked through the archives, and Shelly did indeed ask for her images. This is declined, as since she requested them, she has first pick of the images. 02:28, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

So sorry, I didn't see that at all Dx Sorry Shelly! 03:40, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (A) - Redone
I didn't really see the point in this, as A) I could've tweaked it and B) The old image looked fine as it was, but it says that it needs to be redone on the forum. Redone to match elder and queen images, OA is Rainfacestar and Ashshadow. Comments? :/ <span style="">04:45, 31, 03, 2012