Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 74

Leafstar (Alt. L) ~ Approved
I hope this doesn't get declined. I know it sucks. Comments? 21:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

We've already decided she doesn't get a manga alt. I think this will be declined. Plus, if you were going by the manga it should match exactly. 21:19, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

pfffft it doesnt suck but if we are gonna keep this up, You should make it look more like how she is in the manga. Like maybe lighten the white because it looks too gray and lighten the patches. Make it look more like how Moonstream did it: - 21:26, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think Ivy's right, but, if we do keep it up, the white should be more cream colored. Not like Daisy, but, just not white. xD 21:38, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hope this stays up, I made it match the manga image, and made it more cream colored. 21:53, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's very pretty, but the last one was declined so... But honestly, Leafstar looked tabby and white on the manga covers. I saw no tint at all in the white parts save for gray shading. 21:54, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

...I said not completely cream. Jeez. She wasn't pure white. It's like...this off-white/very light cream color... 22:01, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

If you say so. Everyone has a different perspective. Anyway, if this stays I say lighten the shading on the front legs and add some depth to her eyes. 22:05, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color match the ear pink. 22:45, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The earpink and nose color are allready the same, for everything else, changes are hardly showing. 23:30, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say we wait to see what Iceheart says but I'm pretty sure it won't. Don't make the shading so dramatic on the paws, tone it down please. 23:41, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Epic failure. 00:47, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, if this stays up, then maybe adding some shading to her back paw.. It seems just plain white.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

It's still too creamy. Make it more offwhite. 00:56, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, add more depth to the eye color. Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:13, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it's getting better.... 01:17, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

It might just be me, or is there some colour that leaked from our <--- haunch onto our <--- front leg? 02:03, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighen the cream to the color of her on the manga cover of "The Rescue". 11:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ummm if this is the alt shouldn't the pelt patches be in a different place? if so one on the chest would be good. Also smudge the tail. It looks unnatural. 21:26, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

No Sandstorm, alts taken from pictures need to match the pictures exactly. This is Leafstar from the manga. 21:28, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a stray line on the left side of the image. 21:34, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the image. Hopefully, this one is better. Sorry for the straight line, it was the letter I. I think the tail is fine. Smudging the tail would be smudging the whole tail. 23:35, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Lighten up the shading a tad. 23:36, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to, you can connect a stripe or two to another stripe on her hind leg. 23:47, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink should be a little less red. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 00:50, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

ReUploaded. I lightened the shading a tad and connected a stripe. Changes aren't showing for the earpink. 14:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Er, I really hate to say this but the white should be cream because she was described as a cream and brown tabby...*cowers in fear of being whacked for making you change it* Oh and lighten the white shading (even though you're gonna hafta fix it anyway to be cream) and make the eyes less red and evil looking. Also lighten the tabby part of her. This is really pretty, anyway. 17:22, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

No because her colors are tabby and white on the cover of the Rescue. Define the stripes on the face, particularily the ones that surround her eyes. That's one thing I liked about her manga apperance. 17:33, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 23:37, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

This should be uploaded over the Leafstar.leader.alt.png file. Otherwise, it won't work with the Charart template that displays character images on pages. 05:58, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

There appears to be some waste around the whiskers and some of the brown has blurred onto the white on the front legs. 14:50, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed everything. The image is actually a very slight cream, not fully white, but it looks white. 15:03, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Theres some waste on/near the ears.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  19:35, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

ReUploaded. Whopsie! Didn't notice that! XD. 00:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, here we go. Be prepared...OK! First, make three stripes on the top of the face instead of two. There needs to be 2 stripes on the cheeks instead of 3. Also, the stripes on the haunch need to look like mine because in the manga her stripes are going down not criss-crossed, according to the browse inside on HarperCollins. Also, there needs to be 5 stripes on the tail, not six. *takes moment to breathe* Ok, that's it. *gasps for air* 11:45, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Stoneclaw! Darken the shading a teensy bit. 12:00, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, guys. It says in the guidelines that we are (in no way, shape or form) to copy the art from the Warriors books exactly. If it's a little off, it doesn't matter. I think the stripes are fine the way they are. 14:52, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

ReUploaded. Cloudskye told me to lighten the shading instead, so here it is. 15:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading was a bit light.... 15:16, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. CBA? 20:36 Thu Oct 27

None; approved. 20:43, October 28, 2011 (UTC)