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Mitzi(KP)~ For Approval
Ive had this for a bit, I was just waiting for Dawncloud to be done! ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:26, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is great! But could you define light on the collar as it's dark and sort of hard to see, whiten the white except for the face as it looks rather gray and add a bit of the base above the nose and between the eyes? Since she has a manga image and it has that bit of the base in the place it'd probably be good to have it here. You're getting good! SquidwardPlays 18:35, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Also, waste at base of the tail, both hindpaws, the outstretched forepaw, muzzle and both ears. I can't send screens in but if nobody else does I can later SquidwardPlays 18:37, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I dont see waste, and on my first upload, there wil ost likely be no waste. I do a waste check evry time, and I make absolute shure evry 3 times. ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:46, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

[https://imgur.com/a/PJ38A8Q%7CHere's reference for the waste. It is there.] SquidwardPlays 19:03, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add another layer of shading to add some depth to the image? Very nice job Owl 19:10, 02/5/2019

Oh and as beautiful as this collar is, it has to match File:Mitzi.RP.png her manga collar. pls use this collar for another kittypet I love it so much 19:24, 02/5/2019

Re-up, Rip collar. ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:45, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I liked the collar too, oh well. But the white hasn't been whitened at all. It's still very gray. Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:46, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

The waste at the base of the tail is still there, btw, just checked. https://imgur.com/a/u4SZlQC <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, it is the shading making the white look gray. now I get the pain of white cats. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:01, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Looking good ^^. but don't forget to extend the stripe of the base on the face to reach the muzzle, there is on the queen you're matching. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:04, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

oh, you before said to have the base color between the eyes, but I set my base color to the white... oops! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:11, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

That's my bad then, I worded it wrongly. I was refrring to the red color as the base not thinking about what you might've used for the base. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:13, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, its okay. We all do that sometimes! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:15, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Patches are a bit overblurred, compared to the alt queen in the set

I agree, the patches should be more rough and three toned. The colors don't seem to match the image that was pointed out. 20:58, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is great Owlbite, but the pupils are brown, make them black or white (your choice dear friend), and define the light on the collar, and yes there's some waste outside the top of the collar, and unfilled pixels near the latter, still this is good dear friendPotato=) (talk) 22:56, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

what unfilled pixels? and the puipls are artists choice, I vave had them on all my art. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Between the collar and ear, do you want a screenie?Potato=) (talk) 00:10, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

I see them, they are not unfilled pixels. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:23, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Would you like an unshaded screenshot of Mitzi's old image? I made it and would happily provide you with the correct colors should you need them. ​​​​​

yes please. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 01:48, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go. I realize the ear pink is hard to see, so the hex color for that is #EC7676. ​​​​

Re-up, this is cute! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:49, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

maybe sharpen the shading on the face just a smidge? this is adorable owl! 08:36 Wed Feb 6 2019

Re-up, the face is gray!!! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 17:12, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the face is no longer so gray. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:22, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Face should be whitened a bit, pupils are still brown, and the nosepink should match the color of the earpink, paw pads, and tonguePotato=) (talk) 22:55, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Tongue doesn’t have to match. I have a black cat and his tongue is super pink, and his paw pads, nose, and ears are black. So nosepink is fine <span style="">23:03, 02/6/2019

I never match my nosepink to my earpink or anything like that, I don't think it's necessary. — ♡ <span style title="If you can believe,">you're such  <span style="style" title="you&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' re such a dream to me." data-rte-attribs=" style title=you're such a dream to me."&gt;a dream to me. 23:43, 2/06/2019 ​

like I said before, the eye is artists choice, and it is in all my work. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:03, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on both of the back feet and the shading in the ear. Define the lightsource on the center of the body too maybe? I'm having trouble judging where it is coming from, might just be me though so a second opinion here would be good. Smooth out the shading on the belly/flank.

01:20, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I just re-did the shading, I didnt realy like it before, and i think it is sort of cute now! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:27, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Whiten the paws again, the tinted shading looks much nicer! <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:49, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Derfine light on the ear furthest from us? this is cute! --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    12:58, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Colors are off from the alt. queen - the darker brown is noticeably lighter on this in comparison. If it's due to highlights or whatnot, shrink those some to allow for the base to show

sorry if I cant re-up for a bit, I lost the pen tip for my drawing tablet pen, and i cant find the replacements. (dont ask how I manage to do that.) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 05:40, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, when I could draw aigain, a cryed of joy! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:40, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paw closest to us, along with both back paws, it looks like there's a layer of shading over them. Define the shading depth on the arm closest to us and smooth the edges of the overall shading so it appears more gradient. 18:04, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I hope this is good. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Light should be defined more on the legs, they needn't be covered in shadow.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:24, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, adding more light is hard, so sorry if it dosnt show up. If i add much more, it will end up looking white. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:01, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Mitzi (KP).kittypet.png, not what you currently have, Owl. The template won't work if the file names aren't what we have. ​​​

Did it, and Ill re-up for waste soon, even tho I just made sure there was no waste... somehow it got through. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, IDK what happened, but in the art thee wasnt waste, butn this it said there was. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 06:07, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Add light on the paws; they look almost solidly purple, and the difference between shaded/unshaded areas should be more visible

Re-up, this is the best you will get. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:11, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

There's no differences between the last two uploads. Did you perhaps grab the wrong save to upload or whatnot?

Re-up, yes I did. wow. Noe it is better tho! <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 21:05, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite, though the tongue needs some shading, and out of my interest is the paw pad closest to the tongue filled in?--Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:13, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

It is filled in. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:55, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, good now. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 02:58, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

The belly white should be smudged more roughly, out of interest to matching the queen

the white is the base color, how should i do that to the brown part? <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:28, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the brown sharply then, to get the same effect to the eye^^

Re-up, this looks better now! <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:57, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

either define or add the pale brown parts on her front legs 04:20 Thu Feb 14 2019

Re-up, should I put more shading on the lighter parts? <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:30, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

Pad color is leaking on the outstretched front leg 18:52, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

no, it is just the shading tint. ✬ Love is Love forever! ✬ 20:57, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be defined everywhere. 21:00, February 16, 2019 (UTC) Do you have the shading on a different layer? It should also be on one side of the leg and not covering the whole leg. This is marvelous.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 04:01, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I re-did the shading. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  19:26, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the legs and tail. Her front paws are also looking gray, whiten them. 19:45, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I can either have white paws or define the shading, not both. it might be do-able, but it will be very hard. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  20:05, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

It's very possible to do both. Put shading on the bottom of the paws, then make the tops, where light will be hitting it, whiter. The front paws, and the front leg furthest from us need more depth defined. They need to be whitened more too, particularly the paw closest to us. Whiten the back paw closest to us as well. Could you define the lightsource on the body more? I'm having trouble pinpointing where it's coming from. 20:15, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Also, the tail white needs to go further down, this needs to match her queen image.

Try using highlights if you don't use them already. It's optional, but it helps to brighten the image up.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:20, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

I bring a spark of knowledge, if this hasn't been said before. Put the white shading on a separate layer, that way you can toggle the shading opacity without affecting the rest of the shading. If you smudge/blur the shading just right, you'll get a seamless transition from darker shading to lighter shading. Ask me if this isn't clear.

Re-up, I just re-did all of it. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  02:36, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Much, Much, MUCH better! You're doing a great job Owl! The only thing I see is that the paw pads, earpink, and tongue need to be a bit more pink, since purple is sort of a unnatural color.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:02, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

The white still needs to be defined on the paws and tail. Try erasing some of the shading there, that will probably help. 03:47, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

the paw-pads are pink, not purple. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:29, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the darker patches, as they do not match her queen. They should also match her son, Fritz. --Potato&#61;) (talk) 21:46, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

the Fritz image is ment to mach mine, because i got mine up first, and they are the right color. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  05:32, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

You are both supposed to match this image, and Ari has the correct patch placement on the KP image they have up right now.

Tone down the tint

I dont get how my patch placement is off, and I got the color from the original Mitzi kittypet with no shading. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:43, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, for what I understand. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:47, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Could you brighten the paws to be white. They look cream rn 08:52, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the dark patches again. Owl, you may want to move your sig to a template as it takes up a lot of space on the source editor.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 14:05, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Make the belly patch skinner. Also I can always send your Fritz’s file if you needn’t it. ^^ 14:13, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and the light on the legs and tail. 14:56, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-done, ill fix the white soon. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  03:29, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, ugly? Okay? I never knew it was possible to do both! But somehow I did! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  03:35, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define your lightsource and lighten the dark patches. Make a smooth transition between them, you were looking at Ari's shading style, which is rough. Brighten up the white.-- 14:04, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I don't really get what you mean, but I re-did the shading. And I am not changing the color, I have the right colors, I am not changing them. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:59, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some shading on the white?

The patches seem a bit overblurred compared to the queen. 09:21, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the pupil in the eye farthest from us. It may be hard, but just draw a thin line for a pupil and it should look better.-- 16:48, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Whiten her white parts more. Might be my eyes, but the darker patches look like a slightly different color than that of her queen? The earink also needs to be lightened. The paler of the color on the hindleg is too dark compared to the queen as well. 15:38, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading? Whiskii ✿ 14:00, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Birchstar (RC) (Le) - For Approval
recreating a stripe pattern that I made in 2011 is hard... imagine that <span style="">20:39 Tue Feb 12

Define the shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:40, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think I removed all the "Y-stripes" in the redone version. Can you reduce them?

reuploaded <span style="">22:48 Wed Feb 13

Define the front leg shading? 23:37, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

shading could be defined all over, an maybe some depth too <span style="">00:36, 02/14/2019

reuploaded <span style="">04:24 Thu Feb 14

Where's your light source exactly? I'm not really seeing a consistent one right now but it could just be my brain muddling things. 04:47, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading or lighten it.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:17, February 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I redid the shading to make things clearer, i'm aiming for a light source coming from the front + above <span style="">22:30 Sun Feb 17

is -> paw supposed to be unshaded?

reuploaded <span style="">04:11 Tue Feb 19

could you lighten and smooth out the shading just a tad? 14:43, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

yes, been super busy. will update tomorrow <span style="">06:48 Sun Feb 24

reuploaded <span style="">02:50 Mon Feb 25

CBA? 05:31, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

sorry to break, but the base on this seems darker than the star and the shading seems rather flat on the front legs

May be me, but the stripes seem just a teensy weensy bit sharper on her StarClan. 23:00, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Velvet (SD) (Alt KP) ~ For Approval
I love these blanks! Hope I know how to texture... Warriorcat1196 (talk) 04:11, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

Define eye depth a lil more? -- 04:13, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded just realized I named the file wrong XD Warriorcat1196 (talk) 05:20, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on ---> ear? And expand the shading on the haunch and shoulder? 06:52, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

It may just be me but the pawpad and tongue colour is really bright, almost neon, and kinda throws off the image. Would you mind making it a bit of a duller pink? Up to you.

22:03, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded this what you had in mind? Warriorcat1196 (talk)

Define the lightsource? 03:54, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded if this isn't better you'll have to be more specific

Define the shading depth in the the big eare, legs, face, tail and smooth out the back shading a bit.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:52, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better-ish...? 23:03, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, it is much better!Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:29, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading on the haunch? It's looking kinda slim there. 23:09, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading or lighten it on the back and haunch so isn't quite so dark it seems dark than the front body shading and throws it off a lil. 09:23, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This shading was giving me grief so I just redid it entirely using an approved image as reference. Although now that I'm seeing it zoomed out I'm still unhappy with it but... -sigh- 03:11, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

There is some shading leaking on both hind paws. On the front leg closest to us, there of spot where there appears to be shading, but I don't think there'd be any there? The light is hitting it there and it looks off with that patch. Expand the shading on the top hind leg too, maybe? Smooth the shading out too. You're doing a good^^ 15:47, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading Willowstep21 (talk) 13:29, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

i personally think the shading darkness is fine but i believe theres leaking shading on the belly by the hind leg  Whiskii  ✿ 14:02, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Whiskii. Shading darkness is AC (not air conditioning, artist choice). Shading could be expanded almost everywhere tho. 23:01, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Swiftstar (WC) (L) ~ For Approval
I heard that if they're leaders/KPs you can do two so here we go! Shading's hard on this blank...

Very good Warriorcat! Just add some depth to the shading and blend the earpink.Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:52, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Instead of blurring the earpink, you might be better of smudging just a tiny bit instead 04:28 Sun Feb 17 2019

Sorry but I cant find your light source..? -- 04:40, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

hm i believe its coming from the left 05:55, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

sorry for the double comment but you named the file wrong, it should be File:Swiftstar (WC).leader.png -- 06:00, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is the left, do I need to emphasize that? Also before I do anything to the image, is there a way to rename a file on here or do I need to upload a new one? (You know what I made that exact spelling error at least ten times last night...)

You can overwrite the misnamed file (if you use GIMP or a similar program) by clicking a button called "Overwrite existing file" with the correct name and that should fix it. Also yes define the light source.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:00, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

If your shading is coming from the left, I'd suggest removing the section of shading you have on that side of the neck, that might be what it throwing your source. When you reupload the image, instead of doing it over this one, reuploaded over the one that Silv linked and replace it here. Also might I suggest adding some depth to the shading too? 20:26 Sun Feb 17 2019

Reuploaded I ended up blurring it bc smudging is hard on paint.net. Also I don't really know what it means to add depth to shading so I hope this is better...? 21:37, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Adding depth to the shading is practically defining it. For blurring, try using GIMP (it's free). There are many ways you can blur, such as with Gaussian Blur (tho it may mess up the lineart) or running the dodge tool over where you need to blur. You can pick any brush to help you with blurring. You could also use to opacity bar to adjust the shading. The file name is still incorrect, you are missing the t in Swiftstar. Excuse the wall of text. (P.S you can smudge the shading too)Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:57, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

I'm very sorry, I'm an idiot--i fixed it and reuploaded under the correct file name but didn't change the file name in this page... RIP I'm smart. Okay, now try.... 02:14, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I'm a little confused, is there still any criticism now that I've uploaded the correct image...? 01:36, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

You ask for comments after three days have passed. Could you smooth out the shading a little on the legs?

There's also shading leaking on the <--- haunch, parts of the tail, <--- front leg, and chest (red). And the <--- ear pink (blue) appears to be leaking as well. 23:20, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry... I was hoping to appear smarter now than when I was 11... RIP. Honestly I should've waited given how long it was before I had a chance to upload but, alas... I did what I could with the shading, turns out paint.NET's smudge tool is actually useless for minor tweaks--or I just have no idea how to use it. Could go either way. 03:21, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a little bit on the chest, tail and neck? There appears to be some sharp spots there. Add a tad of shading to his right ear too. I can't tell if there's some shading leaking on the <--haunch? 15:52, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

i think the earpink is leaking a little from the edges? Whiskii ✿ 14:03, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be expanded and defined a little more. 23:03, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Millie (Alt KP 2) ~ CBA
I really love Millie in the mangas... 19:11, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Very good Les! Fill in > that eye and define your lightsource on the collar and bell. Darken the paw pads slightly because they look a lil white on my screen, and also add shading depth.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:05, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

This has to match her alt loner in terms of stripe placement^^ I do love the stripe pattern though, so if you wanted to keep that for another cat I'd definitely encourage it, but most of it doesn't match.

Spooks meant alt loner 2. ^^ 20:32, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 21:28, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

this is looking really nice! can you make the shading more visible? 01:12, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ^^  22:26, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

i think just a little definition of the shading on the front legs and imo this image would be cba material 14:41, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm could you match the stripe color a bit closer to the alt loner? There’s a noticeable difference to the eye at least

Re-Uploaded! 20:43, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

OH Sorry Spooky! I missed your comment ;-; I was using the colors she had in the manga.. I can fix it in a sec! 20:43, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth on the back legs? 22:46, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue, tone done the highlights (or whatever is causing it) in the ear a bit, and actually the light should be defined on the back legs.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:58, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 01:01, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's an offputting stray stripe or piece of shading in the pelvis area, where the two hind legs meet the belly? 04:45, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 19:00, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the tail shading and I think this should be good to go?

The stripes don't match the loner at all, though. Nor do the colors. She shouldn't be this pink, as the loner isn't that far off in terms of coloring when compared to the image from Graystripe's Adventure. ​​​​​

Re-Uploaded! I changed a lot... 23:27, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Her stripes are thicker and more blurred on the loner. And darken the paw pad closest to the tongue, it looks almost white. 23:34, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 15:58, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the strieps more?

Re-Uploaded! Is this better? 19:01, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you extend the second stripe from the left (not the one on the rump) to reach the haunch line? And maybe smooth the stripes all just a bit? 05:11, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 15:02, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

She should have four stripes on her tail, I can't tell if there is a fourth one and the shading is just covering it up? 15:56, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! I just forgot there were four.. 17:26, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:10, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Stonestar (Le)~For Approval
Don't tell me my art looks like Owl's because they showed me how to do cat art, so I adapted to their style, and first- first cat art I have ''posted! ''Axolotls are fudge (talk) 19:59, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Please recede the shading. It it making him dark. Ax, you did a great job on this, but just fix up the shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:02, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the deputy image, which means the eye color and base color need to be altered

Could you also expand the pupil? It's very hard to see. 20:30, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I can't tell if the shading is good. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 00:49, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

this is nice for your first! blur the edges of the shading to smooth it out 01:09, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

The pupils are overblurred, please sharpen them. The earpink could use a lot of definition, and adding on to Burnt's comment, I think the shading should be lightened 5-6 ticks on the opacity bar.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:43, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the pupils are not blurred at all, they never were, but I hope this helps! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 02:39, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Err.. it doesn't appear you changed anything. Did you upload the right file? If not feel free to slap me.Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:04, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws, muzzle and I'd suggest removing a bit from the top of the head the left side of the neck and a little on the chest too. Add a white dot of light in his eyes. 04:00, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

I see a difference, the eye changed, and the earpink on the → ear is different. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:35, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Add some eye white. And the eyes do look really blurry, perhaps sharpen the color.

Patch already mentioned the white! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:58, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't notice.

There is also some shading leaking away from the lineart by the --> front leg. 15:57, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Add more light to the right ear? (Also, the comment you added at first is very, very unnecessary.)-- 13:10, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

I dont get what you mean by the comment I added first. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 20:23, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

your comment when you first posted this, and i agree it was unnecessary

what does that has to do with the art? Why did that need to be pointed out? Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  22:11, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

"Don't tell me my art looks like Owl's because they showed me how to do cat art" This is what they are talking about. This can come off as rude to others. Anyways, define the earpink in > this ear.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:00, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, OWO that was ment to be a joke! Sorry! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:38, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please lighten the shading another 5 ticks on the opacity bar (or however what program allows you to adjust shading.) The pupils are overblurred, maybe try the sharpen tool at a rate of 6 or seven with a medium brush. And I cannot make out any earpink, darken it a few ticks.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:33, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, it is hard to sharpen things that were never blurred, but I just re-did the eyes. and the ear pink, cannot be made any more visible now. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 02:43, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

lessen the shading on the ear, that might be the problem

Define the eye depth, there's waste near the --> ear and <--- paws (blue), and leaking shading on the belly, <--- foreleg, <--- haunch and base of the tail (red) 23:24, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading depth and smooth out the shading? 00:21, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-done, I didn't like it before, and it was hard to do with like... 20 almost useless layers, I'll lighten it up though! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:01, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, lightened by a bit. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:03, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking away from the base of the tail, and on the blanks right haunch and foreleg. 14:13, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also be smoothed out a little more on the right haunch. 01:01, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

the left haunch's shading is leaking a lil by the paw  Whiskii  ✿ 14:05, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Expanding on to Ivybreeze's comment, the shading could be smoothed everywhere. 23:04, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Sol (L) ~ For Approval
me before this: i probably shouldn't brag but dag i amaze and astonish. me after this: you have created a new kind of stupid.

hm by looking at his other images i believe there are more brown splotches on him, and that the texture doesnt look as linear as on this one. just some initial thoughts, i know this pattern is insanely difficult to match 14:57, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I think so too, but I'm not exactly sure where they're placed and idk anyone who has a file so yikes. but i'll try my best

Try, if you haven't already, matching the old leader image for the brown splotches. --> front paw appears brown, a bit more on both shoulders and in the mane, and throughout the tail. 21:30, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Are those 2 white pixels near the base of the tail intentional or is it leaking? -- 08:42, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

re-up

waste below the tail, and can you define the shading everywhere but the white? <span style="">01:57, 02/21/2019

re-up

I think the pattern is sharper? You're doing a really fantastic job on this btw. 23:26, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

i also think that the texture lines converge more 00:20, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The patter needs to be softer, with more speckles. Also, I recommend using a light orange or yellow color and putting it on overlay, which is how the ginger pops on the rogue and other images. <span style="">23:29 Sat Feb 23 2019

Still working?

Pasha (KP) - For Approval
<span style="">15:41 Mon Feb 18 2019

Could you lighten the shading on the hind legs just a bit? 21:27, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

It's the same as the rest of the cat...unless you mean the back of the paws? They're dark. Like on most tabbies. <span style="">21:46 Mon Feb 18 2019

Yeah, I meant the back of the paws my apologies. ^^' The difference between the front of the paws and the back of them just seems very stark imo. 23:14, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

It's intentional. <span style="">23:20 Mon Feb 18 2019

im aware that the shading is stylized to be hard edged, but could you smooth out the shading on the front paw just a little or make a slight "texture transition" to emphasize the fur? (i wish i had like, just 10% of your art skills man) 14:40, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

imo i think the base pelt could be darkened a bit more 09:20, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah. Should have my laptop back today or tomorrow. Also want to point out that the comment to change something was on the 19th so I have until Tuesday. <span style="">13:46 Sun Feb 24 2019

can you define the shading on the tail and add some more shading to the little belly part under the line right by the back leg? Whiskii ✿ 14:06, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Shnuky (KP) ~ For Approval
blurred shading is hard wth

Shunky is mentioned to be dark, and this is rather light...Potato&#61;) (talk) 14:12, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

...this was the color i put when i was tweaking this and no one said anything when i tweaked it? I'll darken it if you want but ???

i kind of agree with potato that it should be darkened– she does look more neutral to me 14:35, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

i thought shnulkyś collar was black--Willowstep21 (talk) 20:31, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

We cannot tell precisely if her collar is black, but it has to match what it looks like in TaS. So, the flower ribbon has to be removed. Shnuky is not seen on the cover, which doesn't confirm her collar color unlike Sasha's collar. Judging from the picture, it looks dark, so the collar has to be dark.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:06, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

but shouldnt the collar match the manga image Willowstep21 (talk) 19:53, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Willowstep, that's what I was talking about up there.^^Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:44, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

i'll need a picture of her so i know what to put

Here you go!Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:34, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Also, fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue and the shading tint is making her look green.. so maybe change the tint to a blue or purple?Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:54, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading tint is artist's choice, Star does not have to change it if she doesn't want to.

will upload after this but a, i'm not changing the tint, and b, is that even a paw pad? might be something else

aight so i was doing stuff and that image you linked potato? that doesn't seem dark, seems more neutral. i will change the collar but the base color i am not sure about.

Hmm perhaps color pick the image’s base? Also the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the shoulder^^ Ik shading tint is artists choice but it really clashes with the earpink in particular, could you dull it just on that perhaps?

re-up your wish is my command

could you define the depth? love the shading color 00:38, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The pink is leaking from the paw pads on the back paws -- 20:11, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

can you define either the shading or light on the collar? its just flat rn I need to try green shading   <span style="">17:33, 02/23/2019

Still working?

Harley (L) ~ For Approval
why do i even try -- 09:06, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more pale gray to reach the below the eyes (they meet the bottom of the eyes on the rogue), and I think the stripes are supposed to be a tad thicker? 16:34, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reups -- 07:49, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Stripes seem to be a bit closer together on the body of the rogue, and also wouldn't go all the way across on the tail^^

The pale gray still needs to meet the eyes, too. 23:05, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

reups rip harley gimp ver. and welcome lame sai art -- 09:13, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thinner and curlier on the rogue.

repups -- 08:08, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

I believe there should be more stripes.

reups -- 09:09, February 23, 2019 (UTC) -- 09:09, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a few more, his rogue shows that he has quite a bit. 09:17, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

reup mk -- 09:31, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Connect the two face stripes to the top corner of his eyes? It also looks like he has an extra stripe on the left of his face on his cheek. The stripes on the head of the rogue don't appear to reach the pale part of his face, so that should be removed. Could you also make the stripes thicker? His nose also looks darker on the rogue. This is turning out lovely! 15:32, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

The nose is the same color. -- 08:00, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Might be me but I feel like the stripes are okay. The rogue's arent that thick either. -- 08:01, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reups -- 08:03, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

My bad, I meant the ridge of the nose should be darker. 16:12, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smallstar (L) - CBA
Hi, it's been awhile! The shading's a bit messy, the light's meant to be coming from below them. 16:21, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on ---> front leg? It's great to see you back! 16:31, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading please. WB Finches! Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:43, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Could you light the shading, its really blue (or maybe just darken the tint). Also could you define the light on the --> side of the body, mainly the leg and haunch. 05:31, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thanks guys! 11:24, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded (Again) - Made the shading lighter all over! 11:31, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Changed the shading completely. 11:57, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

I know there wouldn't be much with this lightsource, but could you define the light on the face? 17:20, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

the light on our right front leg can still use some expansion with the source you have <span style="">17:34, 02/23/2019

Re-uploaded - Tweaked the shading as requested. 18:21, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading on his eyes? I can't really tell what color they are with the shading covering them. 22:38, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened the shading over his eyes and messed around with the chest shading.

Can you define the shading depth a bit? 01:03, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

You didn't sign your last comment Finches =). Define the shading on the back paw farthest from us. 04:42, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Whoops sorry, I went back and signed it. I've added paw shading and darkened my shading depth. 10:59, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

could you sharpen the shading in general and give it a more defined shape? 11:53, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  - Sharpened the shading some, but on the legs especially I think the pattern makes the shading hard to see? 12:07, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Shading looks good imo Malina457 (talk) 17:53, February 24, 2019 (UTC)malina

Hm well. The sharpening helped a lot but can you smooth it just on the white of the > leg? It’s a bit too sharp just there

this is looking good. could you lighten the shading then define the depth? 09:49, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  - Thanks! I smoothed his leg and lightened the shading. I tried to make the depth more obvious not sure how successful that was. 17:34, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Nightstar (Alt Star) - For Approval
and I have many, many more <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:08, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the depth a lil? 00:36, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

And lighten it overall (not contradictory to the previous comment because you can do both. Just add a thinner darker layer to the shading)

Reups Idk if it looks different enough but I'll fix it up again in a bit or something if someone wants me to <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:39, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading on the <-- eye? It looks wonderful! 03:10, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth on the legs, chest, and tail? <span style="">17:36, 02/23/2019

TR Ginger-and-black kittypet ~ For Approval
I think I named this correctly but could someone rename it if not. 00:06, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

i know its going to be extremely difficult cuz my torties personally come out to be similar to this one... can you define the shading on the tail and the legs? 00:19, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups there actually wasn't any shading there lmao 07:04, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

would you mind making the ear pink a lighter/more visible color? it blends in with the pelt color

I cannot see the paw pads at all. Please lighten the black by one shade or so. 01:39, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth on the haunch?

I think the shading can be defined overall. And maybe lighten the collar a few ticks, it blends in with the fur, or at least add some sort of pattern to it so it can be seen? <span style="">17:39, 02/23/2019

Harveymoon (KP) - For Approval


01:12, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the tag a bit bigger Willowstep21 (talk) 13:31, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Tag size is artist's choice I believe, but it is up to Winter. 14:09, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, tag size is artist's choice and I only added it to match the manga version. I’d rather not change it.

17:44, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the collar shading some? Also think the collar coloration would be darker to match manga etc

the shading on the haunch and belly could be smoothed some, and possibly expanded a touch on the haunch too. <span style="">17:41, 02/23/2019

shading is missing a little bit on the tail right by the haunch, also can you lessen the amount on the tail? Whiskii ✿ 14:09, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome! Love it! -Texaswild

Remember to only comment if you see something on the image that needs to be fixed, Texas. While what you said is kind, it does not belong on the approval page and causes clutter. 18:25, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Rose (TS) (KP) ~ CBA
Comments? 23:31, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

could u smooth out the shading on her shoulder? 10:31, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

And the tail slightly while you're at it, too. 17:30, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:46, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Nutmeg (KP) - For Approval
fire mom! 03:05, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken the paw pad closest to the tongue, since it's nearly white. 03:40, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

reup  03:59, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the ear shading a lil? 08:41, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

I think the white curves up the back of the hind leg on the queen? 17:29, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

reup  23:29, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge out the white a little more over the nose/face in general? Seems a bit more so there on the queen rn

I really can’t see much of a difference. Can I get a second opinion? Or a redline if I’m just not seeing it -- 20:51, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Gray Wing (L) ~ For Approval
i hate this -- 04:34, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink a little and lighten the shading?

Reups -- 09:04, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth? <span style="">17:43, 02/23/2019

Add some shading to the base of the > haunch?

Reups -- 08:04, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Purdy (KP) ~ For Approval


having a lil bit of trouble seeing shading. -- 09:05, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

The tear in the <-- ear to the right seems to have base color in it? Could younpossibly remove that if that part of the ear is suppose to be torn? 09:30, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you provide a redline? It's sort of supposed to be like that because of the way the ear looks on this blank. When I removed the base color it looked.. flat.

I'm not sure how I'd provide a redline. I was looking at his other images and its torn completely through so just maybe remove the colors in that area? Looking at it now, it just seems like just the earpink part was torn and it should go through the whole ear. 11:17, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

I see what you mean but it looks weird when I remove the color. Are there any tips to make it look right?

I think drawing some black pixels so the base doesnt look so abrupt there shoukd work? Like where there's no black just brown drawing the lineart there shoukd fix that. Sorry if it doesnt make sense, I can probably do a redline in tge morning jf itndoesnt make sense. 11:41, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried.. any other tips would be appreciated.

Doesn't he need rheumy eyes, or was that from his elder days? Define the shading everywhere. I'm hardly seeing it at all. 13:14, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think so because his old kittypet doesn't have it. Also, I don't think I can define the shading any further than this.

CBA? 05:28, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry for breaking this but a patchy fur spot is unfilled. It is on the haunch. 23:59, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

I hate saying "it's fine" many times in a row, but the old kittypet has unfilled patchy fur so I intentionally left some unfilled. And he's also described as clumpy so there should be some fur sticking out without the patches. I honestly don't see an issue with it?

Rose (FQ) (KP) - For Approval
Guess what... I tried a new style! First time trying texture OwO  Axolotls are my children!  18:21, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

This looks really good! But could you define the ear pink for me? 23:06, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the brown parts of the legs and tail? 23:33, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

nice job on this one Ax, shading is leaking by the tail, and back haunch! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  23:56, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define your lightsource. 03:42, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up! Any better? Greenflower, I wasn't sure what you meant about defining the light source so I just defined more the light and shadow difference. Axolotls are my children!  21:26, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. And I'm Potato, but Greenflower is fine ;) 21:51, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the haunch– this is pretty! 09:48, February 25, 2019 (UTC) lighten the belly shading plz Willowstep21 (talk) 20:14, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Splashheart (L) - For Approval
00:57, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

He looks cross-eyed, like he stared at the TV for too long XD 03:43, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

i dont think he looks cross eyed, tbh. 05:17, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

He does actually, its more of a lazy eye actually. 05:27, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

i agree he looks crosseyed, and i believe the entire > side should be in shadow  Whiskii  ✿ 14:12, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Livy (KP) ~ CBA
There are some unfilled pixels near the tail. 05:49, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Aren't those supposed to be unfilled? My other long haired kittypet images don't have them filled

This is what I'm talking about. These pixels are filled on Rose's KP above. 14:40, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Also just got into a edit conflict with Ferk, I think she wants you to add more white. 14:41, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I have to go back and change all of my long-haired ones, then. Also, may I have a second opinion on the white? Technically this is still a "white and brown" cat, and there is no indication of whether there's more white or not.

tbh it's okay, we passed a few bicolors with color to color ratio than is here recently, and so

I think the white is fine. When I did Sorreltails alt she had less white than this. 03:09, February 25, 2019 (UTC) CBA?

Fuzz (KP) ~ For Approval
Comments? 00:27, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on both ears? 02:54, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth it out on the tail as well. 03:02, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:07, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

could you thicken the tail lineart so it isnt so thin? 03:08, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

It seems to be the same thickness as the rest of the lineart. 03:11, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly fix so the tail just look choppy but matches the style that the rest of the body has? It just kinda seems off? it also looks really thin 03:15, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? 03:29, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

That's a lot better ^-^ 04:53, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

i think theres a pixel missing on the tail  Whiskii  ✿ 14:13, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:42, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand on the <-- side of the tail so it doesn't look like its abruptly cut off? 16:10, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:40, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the face a smidge?

Reuploaded. 20:49, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Rowanstar (CotC) (L) - For Approval
this was...difficult 02:19 Mon Feb 25 2019

could you make it so that the ginger splotches blend into the black pelt rn, given the semi-realistic style? 09:47, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

The ginger is fine, it matches his starclan image <span style="">13:28, 02/25/2019

my bad, i didnt realize he had a starclan image 13:41, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Rowanfur (KP) - For Approval
03:20 Mon Feb 25 2019

hm not sure how to say this, but could you make it so that the stripes blend into the pelt slightly more? 09:46, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Stripes look fine to me. <span style="">12:03 Mon Feb 25 2019

this looks amazing!! i strive to do art like this ;-; can you define the shading depth a smidge? Whiskii ✿ 14:14, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you bailey! <3 21:44 Mon Feb 25 2019

Oakstar (L) ~ For Approval
Forgot to add evil eyes. And I'm pretty sure the leader was first in the set so I match that. 05:34, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? Vec this is gorgeous Malina457 (talk) 12:47, February 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reups Evil eyes o-o 13:39, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Birdwing (KP) ~ For Approval


I can't tell, but does this have the scar? It should, since that's the cite for this KP image. It was way back in SkyClan and the Stranger.

hm sooo the scar per the cite would hang above the > eye, right? which there is a few pixels of pink there, for it, but it's largely not visible here + the shading covers it. could try to define it, but i'm not entirely sure how

Nah, it's all good. I just wanted to know if it was there, since I know that was brought up with this image before. If it's there, that's all good, you don't need to define it, since I know there's not a lot of space to work with.

Clovertail (KP) ~ For Approval


Define the shading depth on the legs, tongue, and tail. 22:59, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Barring the tongue, I think the rest of the shading is fine and doesn't need to be defined.

Reuploaded

Minty (KP) (KP) - For Approval
comments? <span style="">20:44, 02/25/2019

Smooth out the shading on the neck a little. Good job Ferk (sorry for the edit conflict yesterday)! 22:58, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Victor (KP) - For Approval
are the stripes too dark..? 22:27, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Nope! But the base looks a little more cream than brown, so darken it a shade? 22:57, February 25, 2019 (UTC)