Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Mitzi (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Hawktalon. Redone because unrealistic stripes and in my opnion didn't look like a tortoiseshell. Comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:55, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the ear pink? If it's there, define it please. 13:59, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Hold up, Elo, the whole tortie description has been thrown into question. This might have to be changed. 21:33, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Should I change it now? or what? x.x.  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 00:22, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' on chat last night we established her real description, a two-toned gray and white cat. comments? C: -- Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 20:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudges ever so slightly so she doesn't look prickly. Very pretty! 22:04, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful job, Elo~ 01:17, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 14:12, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Willowshine (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to look like the MCA image. Man, this was a difficult pattern to transfer onto a kit. DX 01:27, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. :3 But shouldn't the nose be black? Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 02:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

No, not all dark gray cats have black noses. 02:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * derp* XP Blur the earpink then? C: Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 07:58, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  19:44, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more >3< 00:48, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing a tthe moment, dear. 01:00, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I know, but I checked the latest image uploaded and looked at it. 22:49, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:11, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Princess (KP) ~ Redone
They said I could be anything. So I became a pointed tabby. Haha, anyway, this is how I've always imagined Princess, actually. Comments? 02:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad? 02:24, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

FINALLY A POINTED TABBY! *celebrates* Add some shading to her back paw. 03:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And color in the tag. XD 07:21, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It was colored in, but I've defined it witha different shade. 00:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. <3 This is gorgeous Shelly! 06:45, 29, 03, 2012

Didn't see this until just now. Sorry, I'll have to do this later, I'm on my way out at the moment. I'll be gone all weekend, so bare with me. 21:51, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:11, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Redone
OA's were Cloudskye, Elorisa. Needed to be redone to match the kit ~. Comments? :3 22:26, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that ear pink. 22:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the stripes on the apprentice more closely. They need to be darker, more textured, and they need to conform to the shape of his body. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

His main coloring needs to be a bit darker to match as well. Also, try to match the ear pink on the other images and don't have it so low that it leaks into his forehead. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Uh Shelly, the apprentice is being redone to match the kit. 01:31 Thu Mar 29

The stripes don't match the kit, either, and the kit is essentially the apprentice with thinner stripes. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. (Sorry if what Shelly already said covers this). 06:41, 29, 03, 2012

Re-uploaded. I don't think the changes are showing. I fixed the stripes and they match a whole lot better. Blurred the earpink as well. 19:16, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the ear pink more triangular and less neon-y. 02:26, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not changing the colour since it matches the kit, same hex code. :3 10:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, can you Shelly? I don't want to waste time trying to get them right. 15:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
...I don't have much to say about this one. OA was Echomist, and the highlights needed to be blurred and toned down. File changes aren't showing yet, I assume. 23:32, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Nice :3 Blur the highlights. 23:34, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

...File changes aren't showing yet. This is the old version. =3 23:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Oh..I'm sorry Dx. 23:38, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (A) - Redone
I didn't really see the point in this, as A) I could've tweaked it and B) The old image looked fine as it was, but it says that it needs to be redone on the forum. Redone to match elder and queen images, OA is Rainfacestar and Ashshadow. Comments? :/ 04:45, 31, 03, 2012

Princess (Q) - Redone
I actually did get permission from shelly to do this over skype. So anyways, needed to match her kittypet. Not sure who the OA was. Comments? 06:58, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I'm seeing the right one, but shouldn't there be white extending from her face to her belly? The bit above her legs? Dx Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 14:47, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

White goes on bottom of tail, not top, and extends across her entire belly. 74.110.191.160 15:22, March 31, 2012 (UTC) (shelly logged out)

You guys are looking at Misty's I think. It does extend from her face to her belly, and the white is on the bottom of the tail. 22:07, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? ^^ Very prety :)  14:01, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Birdflight (Q) ~ Redone
Ew >.<. OA was Alaska. Comments? 05:30 Sun Apr 1

Define the shading? 14:02, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes aren't showing. 15:51 Sun Apr 1

Ferncloud (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked
Eh...I just realized I forgot her facial stripes...and the stripes on the lower part of her hind leg...I'll add those in in a bit. I'm the OA, and she needed stripes on her legs, tail, and face. Comments? 16:22, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Pearnose (MC) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar12. Shading and highlights were blotchy, odd earpink, herb's shading was messed up, ect. Changes not showing yet :c 17:18, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly, enlarge the earpink a tad, and lighten up the shading a bit. ^^ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  23:49, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Flowerstar (W) - Redone
OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak, or maybe a redo by Bloo. Shading needed to defined and blurred. To save us all some grief, I redid it. I tried to match the pattern as best I could and all the colors are the same. Comments? 23:37, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blue the earpink a smidge. C: Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 01:31, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I doubt changes are showing 02:50, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Jake (KP) ~ Redone
OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire, with a redo by Iceheart. The stripes didn't look natural. If the changes aren't showing here is the correct image. 02:16, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (A) ~ Redone
Gotta match the warrior o' mine, and it just stared at me, tormenting me....... OA's be Sandstar12 and Scarlet. Correct version is here if it don't show. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  06:37, April 2, 2012 (UTC)