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The Old She-cat ~ For Approval
My first rogue image! too many kits lately. I tried getting it similarly coloured to Thistleclaw's manga alt, as in the book, they are the exact same colour.-- 01:53, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on the tail and legs. 01:54, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 02:04, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. 04:38, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the belly a bit. 04:39, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere and the light on the tail 09:08, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

says shes got a tooth sticking out, can you add it? 12:20, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart a bit where the tufts of fur stick out from the base lineart? It looks a tiny bit out of place. Also, I think the body shading itself is fine and doesn't really need defined.

Reupload sorry I didn't answer earlier, my internet crashed >< The tooth sticking out is on her right, as put in her description.-- 22:05, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

And since we see her left, it wouldn't be visible here, I'm pretty sure... Can you define the shading on the back legs (as in the back of the image, not the cat herself).. Like, this one and this one because I am terrible at describing things and I think it's her right legs? I just woke up from sleep so I'm kinda half-coherent I apologize.

Reupload -- 02:05, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs. 05:00, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

I define anymore on her left leg her right back leg really doesn't have light. Does it need to have some light or just lighten the shading?-- 06:51, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the colour of the nose pink? 22:37, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

The nosepink looks fine, tbh. Mind defining the facial shading a tad? 23:22, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 05:57, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

You see the two fur tufts, in the middle of the tail upperside? Would you mind just moving up the fur lineart between them? No offense, but it looks a little awkward, as the tufts are quite high on comparison. If in doubt, shorten the tufts by a pixel, so that they don't look so 'sudden'. Also, I'd suggest adding a few fur tufts to the legs, too. 15:35, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 21:44, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on the face. :) 21:55, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 00:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on all the legs. ^.^ we luv dem legs. 13:07, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

What do you exactly mean? Lighten her right legs and add more light to her left legs? I honestly can't put anymore light on her left back leg. never go on when you're tired. 13:40, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

What I mean is there would be at least a bit of light on all the legs so define the light on all the legs. It just seems like they're all covered in shading. 21:55, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I really can't add anymore light to the legs, it's to the max. this is the original colour. 08:07, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think the legs farthest away from us are supposed to be in the light. 14:00, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 21:32, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light in the farthest legs a biiiit more. Nice. ^^ 19:08, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 21:39, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Branch (lo) - CBA
i don't even know tbh 22:55, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

does he got stripes? and he kinda looks patched rather than mottled. 23:00, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

yea he does, it's just that the mottles are over them =P 23:10, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-up lets see if this works 23:31, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. Would you mind defining the light on the tail and legs? 15:25, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i tried, yo 01:45, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry but i still cant see any stripes at all. 12:12, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can 08:39, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, I can't either. Maybe shift some colors around?

re-up 22:54, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

i'm gonna be that person but i seriously still cant see any stripes. 08:11, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think the darker brown thingies are the stripes. 13:01, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, they probably are, Bramble [minus some of the dark brown spots which are darker mottles] 19:36, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

I gotta agree with David. I'm actually only seeing some of them..there's this part on the back where it almost looks over-smudged, which I think is preventing us from seeing the back stripes..and maybe lighten the tail a tad so we can see the tail stripes. If I don't make any sense at all, feel free to tell me..I'm running on 3 hours of sleep. But this is a gorgeous image, nicely done Beebs. 01:48, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i did a thing?????? 22:13, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 02:41, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) ~ For Approval
Hiya everyone :3 I'm back! (also when I was uploading I saw JC had a kit image already? Yet it wasn't posted on his page... So should I not do this or was his image declined when the other person made him?) Anyway, woo- black kitties 11:30, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

The image was never approved. Also, he needs texture.

Lighten nose pink ~ cute! -- 13:23, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Unless specified in the books, all black chararts must have black noses, as this is what the majority of black cats have. 15:23, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice job! I think I spy a white pixel next to the (our right's) ear. 15:47, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, Sorrel, I believe it's possible for black cats to have darker nose pink, but it might not necessarily be black. I remember asking Breezey about this, and I think that's what she said. But given that his other chararts have black noses, it's best to match that.

Reups Thanks everyone :3 I added the texture 21:01, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? .3. 20:42, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Mind defining the light on the tail? 22:24, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

It's been more than a week it was re-upped, so this has to be declined. Sorry. 22:06, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Um, actually. It's only been five days since breeze commented?? I'm not sure if that applies... 00:12, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think Foxy is right. I'm putting this back for approval unless someone else says otherwise. It isn't fair if someone asked for comments after seven days and it gets declined. 07:50, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Foxy here, it does seem unfair to decline it before a week has gone by. The last reupload date doesnt really count in this situation, since Vixen asked for more comments in the first place. If they dont reupload after a week (?), then i believe thats a long enough timespan to reupload before getting declined. I can see how that could get confusing though. 00:42, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Icicle (Kit) ~ For Evaluation
Teenie Tiny Itty Bitty Kitty! ♥♥♥ -- 14:07, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very cute :3 darken the shading on the tail and paws ^^ (I also fixed the heading for ya) 14:10, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped~ better? -- 14:38, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, please. 15:21, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth too. And I'll get to that GIMP tutorial later today I promise. I just didn't get much time last night. .-. sorryz. 15:46, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I will do asap. Which might not be for a bit... -- 15:58, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

There is a white pixel on the back foot and there is waste everywhere. One the otherhand, beautiful job! 21:38, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

She's pale gray so lighten her up tons. 00:06, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped~ Made lighter, shading makes him look darker.-- 16:11, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste below his foot. The color of the cat is also overlapping the lineart on the legs, the lineart should be pure black. Everything should be below it. Define the shading, and lighten him up a little. 23:28 Wed Feb 25

I made the tutorial I'll get it to you hopefully tomorrow. And could you smooth out the shading a bit? 05:26, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head?--✫Silverpool on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 09:17, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink, it's looking purple. 12:36, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped --- Oh wow i changed him a lot... -- 16:41, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink is still hot pink. Waste is above ears and around the paws.... Can you put shading, everywhere? 23:13, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Andddd make Icicle more grey. He's turning a little white. nvm 23:15, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart. When you use a paintbrush before blurring, don’t just stop around the lineart, brush over it, so it spreads everywhere over the image.-- 00:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Uppied! Thanks for all the advice! -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 03:11, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading and remove the waste. Define the earpink as well, and the shading is still leaking away from the lineart. 03:19 Sun Mar 1

What do you mean by "The shading is leaking away from the lineart"? -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 14:35, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

You see how the shading is kinda not next to the linear art? That's called leaking. To fix it, just add a new layer then add shading on the part where the shading isn't touching the liner Art. ^^ 14:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Removed the waste~ -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 16:19, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Anything else?-- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 00:12, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks very blotchy. Try to darken it, then blur it. Add shading to the neck. 00:16, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

There's still waste, and the color of the cat is still overlapping the lineart. If you don't already, try to use layers. It makes making charart so much easier when you do. Darken, smooth out, and blur the shading, and define the earpink as well. 12:35 Tue Mar 3

Add shading to the tail. 00:14, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paws just a tad. Not to much, just a couple ticks on the opacity bar will do. 00:45, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (Ancient) ~ Withdrawn
Tetszik a neve :) 21:02, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading. 23:05 Wed Feb 25

I'm not sure if it's just shading or not but can you fix the muzzle? Doesn't quite seem to match her elder image. Can you also darken her eyes a bit?-- 23:13, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:39, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined a bit more tbh I really do not see it on the tail and the legs. 12:33, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh, I think the leg shading is fine. :I 23:17, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Its leaking everywhere... Well, it is on my computer screen 23:22, February 28, 2015 (UTC) I'm seeing it too^^ also define the chest shading. 03:22, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing 11:59, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Ill take over.-- 17:55, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 17:56, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading everywhere. 17:57, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 18:07, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and define the eye depth a little. 00:19, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could i possibly get another opinion on the eyes? I personally think its fine, but i can do it if anyone else agrees. Ill define the tail later in the next upload. 00:51, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think they are fine 08:39, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Yea, they're probably fine. When I first saw it though I thought she looks a bit blind but then I realized it's just that the pupil is small. 11:48, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the eye? 02:07, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tongue. This looks lovely breeze :) 00:13, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I really dont have enough time to work on this at the moment. Anyone without a project can take this. 06:07, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Running Horse (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Whoo this was fun. 08:24, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you edit the lineart slightly to go with the wrinkles? I made him in mind to basically be like a Devon Rex without the super fancy fur and they are big wrinkle monsters with lots of rolls  10:13, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, too. Nice job^^ 13:08, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I tried 08:35, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the chest fur maybe? 14:51, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

No I think it needs to have more shading. 21:38, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. 21:50 Fri Feb 27

Re-upped Chest doesn't need shading, nor does it need lightening up. 06:32, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest, I really do not see any shading at all. I think you chose a very specific brown tint that just happens to be only a couple of shades darker than the rest of the brown(in the color family), and that equals: hidden shading. It blends in, so it pretty much looks like darker brown patches. So I am going to suggest you try tinting a darker brown. And actually I think the chest shading could be defined. 12:24, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped idk how you can't see the shading tbh it looked fine on my monitor. Also, I tinted it red, not brown. However, I lightened up the shading a bit and defined it, because it was looking really dark. 12:32, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the stomach and tail shading? Utsukushī! (Beautiful in Japanese) 23:21, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ew. 10:37, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Either it's my computer or phone or something, but I really can't see the shading on the haunch and tail. <-- side of the cat is fine, but everything on --> side, like what I mentioned, appears to be lighter. Could you please darken it a tiny bit?

??? I can see it fine on my iPad? I'll darken it, but hopefully I'd isn't have to darken it too much- it's on 90 opacity. 05:09, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I really would rather not to define it further. Since I can see it clearly and it's as dark as it can get tbh. 08:06, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (AT) ~ For Approval
This. Very. Bad. 14:38, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

She has a pale chest, I believe. 15:15, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading and/or neck shading  23:18, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 00:13, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Thin the stripes, her stripes are not that thick I don't think.-- 00:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

This is facing a different side so I think it's fine tbh. 05:17, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think her stripes are more broken up; but as Burntclaw says it's facing the other side so... I'm not sure.S i  l  v  e  r  i  a   Always  Shine like the dark moon☽ 05:52, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I'd rather not touch the stripes, because I'm actually rather fond of them. 10:04, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah they look fine. And it would just cause unneeded stress to change them. Define the tongue shading a tad? This is beautiful. ^.^ and Bramble, something in your siggie is making our comments turn small. I tried to look for the source but I couldn't find it. So if someone could, I'd be grateful. 12:57, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reups yep, I'm not changing them. Thank you sweetie Also, the problem was a font-size 2 thingy after the sig ended, and I've gotten rid of it. 16:37, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading just a tad. This is beautiful, Sorrel. =) 21:17, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

She's getting gorgeous. I can't really think there's still any unlisted problems :) 10:31, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think the face shading is fine, personally. 17:47, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes on her sharpclaw are a bit more rounded. I get that it's a different side, but it's still required to match in terms of style.

Reups Okie - I completely redid the stripes on the main body. 16:55, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Tetszenek ezek az ősi nevek^^ 20:16, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and maybe smudge the gray a tad.-- 21:22, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Changes:http://www.ezimba.com/work/150304C/ezimba12232556242400.png 19:55, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadng more, he looks nice^^ 14:33, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Flamepelt (Alt E) - For Approval
I got so much inspiration from Sandstorm's elder for this, and I got the colors from her alt apprentice, actually. If she gets an orange alt, then so does Flamepelt. I am insanely proud of this.

Burnt literally killed me for announcing it cause she wanted it :S could you define the shading on the legs 02:36, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. lmao oops. Burnt already has Running Horse anyways- there's no need to jump the gun on images.

Hey who said I wanted it >:O You see where the transfer from the haunch and the tail? Mind adding some shading there? It seems a bit flat. I'm quite sure some light will be blocked there. I'm so bad at explaining sorry about that X.X 02:51, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There was shading there, actually. It was just flat. I'm also not gonna change the source itself, since as I said above, I basically used Sandstorm's elder as a reference.

lel my shit elder image. anyway can u maybe smudge the facial stripes a teeny bit. 11:06, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Lol, try to keep it a bit more PG..um to be completely honest, I'm having a bit of a hard time seeing the shading. The image isn't flat, so I know there is shading, it's just not too prominent if ya know what I'm saying. So maybe define it a bit more in that way? This is pretty, nice job^^ 14:26, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 'shit' is PG and perfectly acceptable in my book, considering he's talking about his own image and no one else's. Also, I defined the shading, but not that much. I can see it perfectly fine on my own screen. So basically it got defined in certain parts, but not everywhere.

it's fine with me too, but I say if it's bleeped on tv it probably shouldn't be said on a PG wiki page. Just saying :/ it doesn't matter to me though, I'm just thinking of those who feel uncomfortable seeing those kinds of words. 16:58, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

could you lighten the shading actually? it looks kinda dark 23:50 Fri Mar 6

I actually think the darkness is fine- if I lighten it, I can promise that Darkfrost or another user will probably tell me to darken it again. =P

I quite like the shading as it is now, tbh. Mind defining the earpink a tad? damn how do you make such gorgeous tabbies 02:53, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Mistlekit (TPB) (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
lel 13:16, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

很漂亮，^_^ 干得好. define the light on the tail and legs? 13:20, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

tail looks fine to me but legs could use some light 23:49 Fri Mar 6

Define the earpink in the ---> ear. Damn david, this is gorgeous. 00:28, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Meh black kitteh. Comments? 14:19, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
the third alt. i know i forgot the torn ear, i'll add that and lighten the shading in the next upload 23:33 Fri Mar 6

Define the scar. 02:55, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) Kittypet ~ For Approval
Welp. I tried... 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged the collor. 02:49, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg, and blur/smudge the transitions between the colors on the collar if you can. It still looks a bit hard-edged. 02:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged it more and did some stuff :P 03:10, March 7, 2015 (UTC)