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Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, can you Shelly? I don't want to waste time trying to get them right. 15:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

My pleasure. I re-uploaded it, here's the changes since they won't show regularly: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/9/96/20120402190120!Ferncloud.kit.png 19:02, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste down by her paw on ---> side. 20:45, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart also seems a little thick on her left hind paw... 01:54, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks Shelly~ 19:57, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's also waste on her paw on <-- side. 13:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:39, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the queen. 15:55, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked
Eh...I just realized I forgot her facial stripes...and the stripes on the lower part of her hind leg...I'll add those in in a bit. I'm the OA, and she needed stripes on her legs, tail, and face. Comments? 16:22, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added those in. Changes are here. 03:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little more? 01:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you centre the earpink a bit more please? 02:08, 04, 04, 2012
 * You don't have to if you don't want to. 02:52, 06, 04, 2012

Reuploaded. I'd rather not...it's about as centered as it can get. Changes are here. 14:06, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try to match the stripes on the kit? I really don't want to tweak them again, sorry. I also got rid of the spots among the stripes since, on a spotted tabby, the spots don't mix with the stripes on the points. (points being legs, tail, and face) 00:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think the stripes on the alt queen are fine. If memory serves, I think Leggy had this reserved for the stripes first, and this seems a lot easier to match on other images. No offense, but I can't really tell what the stripes are on the kit, and even if I could, it'd be hard to match since the kit blank is a lot smaller, then the queen. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Since Rainly's was reserved and posted first, I believe the kir should match this. o3o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I aksed a few other people's opinions, and they told me to lighten the opacity of the dapples on the points, instead of downright remove them...so... Reuploaded. 14:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (W) - Redone
Comments? :3 OA was Dappleclaw. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ;3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'highlights', darken the shading on the back, add depth to the eye (or define it), and to add on to what Skt said, make the earpink more triangular. 16:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC).

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 18:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

For some reason it's not reuploading and sparking Mooneh rage. >.> 18:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I got it. Re-uploaded. 18:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Move the ear pink more into the ear and lower the opacity a tiny bit. 19:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit as well~ 23:07, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading. 03:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had the black cat expert around me, and this happened. x3 00:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 00:50, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:13, 04 09, 2012

Darken the whole image a bit? He looks dark gray now. 07:29, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit too red. Make a bit more pinkish? 21:10, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:14, 04 11, 2012 13:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Okay...now can you define the shading? x3 13:32, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:07, 04 12, 2012

The earpink is too small, fix that. Also, darken the earpink to a more redder hue, but, as a dull red, and lighten up the whole image. I can hardly see the lineart. 01:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ...I read your comment wrong. -goes to fix earpink again- Anyway, I'm not making it lighter because I was already asked to make it darker as it looked dark gray, so if I do...yeah. 04:43, 04 13, 2012

Bouncefire (A) ~ Redone
Comments? 17:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely :3 Smudge the earpink a tad. 19:17, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/add shading to the ear farthest from us, and blur the haunch shading~ 20:02, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a tad? They look hard-edged. 22:57, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I shall. Sorry, I've had a ton to do this week. I'll take care of it tomorrow. 03:29, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:46, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (W) ~ Tweaked
She needed a plumy tail. Breeze whisker  21:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

It kind of looks a bit boxish to me... Can you round the top? 21:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a bit too plumy... Maybe thin it out so it looks a bit like Squirrelflight's tail? 22:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know. Squirrelflight's tail is "bushy" not "plumy" I can thin it out a little, but I don't think it needs to look like her tail. Maybe it would be better if I were to lengthen the lines showing the fur how it is now so it looks longer, and maybe curve in it a little. Breeze whisker  03:31, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I mean keep the fluffiness, just make it a bit thinner and maybe make the underside like Squirrelfight's and point the tip a bit more. 04:11, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya make the tail highlight (or whatever) look more silvery like the other patches of light? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 20:30, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thin it out just a tad, and maybe make it more ragged or something x3 07:26, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, you can work from this image for reference on floofyness. I'd say at least have the lineart on the tail showing fluffiness extend inward a bit more. 20:31, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  19:32, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (A) ~ Redone
Here it is. I tried really hard, so... Comments away! Oh, and OA was Leaf-storm.

05:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The color looks like it has a little more yellow in it than the warrior. 22:55, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:22, April 10, 2012 (UTC

Define the haunch/tail shading. My gosh, Thistle, this is so perrty~<3 09:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thankies. :3 23:04, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the brown a tad duller. :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:23, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes fade out just a bit. 05:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean by 'fade out'. o3o 01:42, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think she's saying make the tips of the stripes fade instead of them being pointy...like the warrior, perhaps. 04:45, 04 13, 2012

Talon (Alt. CG) - Redone
Muuuuud >:D Needed to be light brown, not russet, and though this wasn't mentioned in the nomination, he's shown as shorthaired in the picture not long. OAs were Mistypebble and Wildheart. Comments? 11:33, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Lvely~  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 13:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 19:46, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  22:33, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blahhh :P *remembers own image* Yuck :P Love it, Paleh! Can you define the shading in all? 21:11, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm such a lazy bum, sorry. DX But anyways, this is the best I can do on such a thin tail. And I'd really rather not blur the stripes, they look a bit too blurry when I do. 14:01, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) - Redone
Oh god. I made it too red didn't I. ;-; OA is Hiddensun, and his colour had to match his apprentice/deputy image. Maple On dA and Skye

00:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC) OA and reason for redo? And yeah, I think you might have made it a bit too red, desaturate him a bit. 03:29, 10, 04, 2012

There's waste all around the image, Maple. 05:58, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors are off, and the highlights look a bit pink, could you fix that? 06:46, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Waste removed, Highlights fixed, and less red. :D Next? Maple On dA and Skye 21:07, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors still don't match. :S 23:19, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit of waste on the left border. 07:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Colour taking isn't working. >.< So I redid it, cause the shading is bugging me. Maple On dA and Skye 18:03, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.' Wait, fixed colour. Thanks Cloudy. :3 Maple On dA and Skye 11:17, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste aaround his muzzle. -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 13:02, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) ~ Redo
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a girl? ouo 19:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sagewhisker (MC) ~ Redone
PSE was being stupid, so that's why this looks bad. OA was Yukitora and Night shine. The highlights were too think and the shaded needed to be blurred. 23:44, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:45, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

She needs long whiskers. 23:55 Tue Apr 10

Lighten the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  23:56, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading more dynamic. Also, your light source isn't really consistant, the light source needs to be at one end of her body. 00:00, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded As you can see, she got a major redo. The lines are texture, and that bright part on her haunch is her base color, not a highlight. 19:01, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her. She's supposed to be white, she looks silverish. 19:09 Wed Apr 11

Reuploaded  19:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the pelt/shading a little bit more? 22:45, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:49, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and lighten up the shading in the middle area a bit. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 11:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - Tweaked
I wish I could re-do this! Original artist was Sunspirit, with tweaks by Wildheart and Rainfacestar. The shading needed to be blurred and darkened. Look here if changes don't show. Comments? 01:04, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading even more? 19:59, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 01:52, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Bramblestar (A) ~ Withdrawn
Hey guys! I put a pale belly on him. 8D OA was BeautifulOblivion. Comments? 03:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Realized there was waste on muzzle. 03:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

He needs paleness on the underside of his tail. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge it, please, and have it come further up his neck to match the other images. 04:36, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Also, it needs to be darker and under the stripes, not on top of them... are you the OA for this version of the image? Because I noted in my nomination that first dibs go to OAs that have the layered files. 04:38, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's also some waste around his chin and chest. 00:07, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I don't have the Original file sooooo. I guess I'm giving this up. ono 03:26, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Next time, please remember to change the heading. Anyone with a free project may take over. 19:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Duke (KP) ~ Redone
Woo 8D I know the earpink is weird, I'm fixing it in a moment...the collar, ears, and eyes are the exact same, so I'm not changing them. Comments? :3 <span style="">17:12, 04 11, 2012

The eyes look kinda pixily, make the eye gradient smooth  17:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, I can't really see it. 17:17 Wed Apr 11

Re-uploaded. <span style="">17:37, 04 11, 2012

Maybe make the black on the haunch curve a bit more? :3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 10:04, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail stripe to make it flow with the pelt more. Skt, I can't, because I'd have to paint over or remove what's on the haunch now, remember how I blurred so it looked the same, and then it would curve...I tried, and it looked unnatural. Sorry Dx <span style="">12:00, 04 12, 2012

Psssh, no apologise, twas just a suggestion. ;3 Make the nose pink a little less neon, and define the earpink a smidge? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">13:32, 04 12, 2012

Oakheart (ki) - Redone
OA is...I have no idea. DX Anyway, it has to match his apprentice image. I think I did a better job on this than I did on the other ones. Comments? Maple On dA and Skye 22:41, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. c: 22:57, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading, actually. 23:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 01:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. 19:33, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

The color still doesn't match. Would you like me to give you the hex code from the apprentice image?

Skye, do you mind? I'd really appreciate it. :3 Maple On dA and Skye 10:52, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

The hex color is <font color="#AB4619">#AB4619 .

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 11:16, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (E) - Redone
Hmmmm..... not my best. And I know, I forgot the ragged ear. I'll add that in a bit. OA was Sandstar with tweaks by Splashy and Bloo. Was redone cause the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 05:38, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, so yea, the ragged ear. Also, darken/define the shading a bit? 14:01, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Tornear (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar I think. Comments? 23:30 Thu Apr 12

lol the old version was showing and I was thinking, this isn't epic enough to be made my Mounty xP Redden the ear-pink and blur it a bit more. 02:32, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye sir! <3 03:21 Fri Apr 13

Cloudstar (L) ~ Redone
There were so many issues with that image, that I CBA to name them all. OA is Sandy, with a tweak by one of the Ivys. Also, I did an alternate version, seen here, which I would personally prefer, since his actual image doesn't seem...patchy...

I personally like the more smudgy one :3 04:06 Fri Apr 13

The smudgey more patchy one looks better 8D  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the gray, he's supposed to be pale gray. 13:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) ~ Tweak
Haven't done a tweak/redo in a bit, so I though I would just do this. ono And plus I love Dark Forest cats cx Needed a torn ear. 00:57, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a bit shallower. If that much of his ear had been ripped in that direction, the entire top of his ear would likely be gone. 01:45, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP) ~ Tweaked
Patches needed to match more lol. OA's=Maplefern (I think? xD), and a redo from me. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:33, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad? :33  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 12:59, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (A) - Redone
OA was Shimmerpool with a redo with the new blanks by our wonderful, talented, and epic Mountainheart. Needed to match other chararts. Comments? 03:38, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken and smudge the stripes a bit, and add a back stripe. Though it's hard to see on his other images, it's there, and so it should be added. 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (W) ~ Redone
Aw man, please don't eat me for this :S It needed to match the leader. It was removed from the redo section but I got permission. OA was Hawktalon I think, I'm too lazy to check XP Comments? 03:54 Fri Apr 13

Blur the throat shading. How you make this stuff, I'll never know 8D 07:36, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (Ki) ~ Redone
He was a triangly tabby. OA's= Shaf Girl with a redo by Mistypebble. i don't think the changes are showing... <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 04:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the brown tail tip thingy C:  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 12:58, April 13, 2012 (UTC)