Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Nominations/Approved 11

Molepelt ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Molepelt.mc.png and File:Molepelt.star.png If I'm not mistaken, both need rumpled fur, since Percy got tweaked for that when he was cited for that. Bb un   legs  01:58, June 27, 2013 (UTC)

Might I have the medicine cat if this passes? 06:48, June 27, 2013 (UTC)


 * 21:59, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 00:18, June 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 01:33 Tue Jul 2

Cinderpelt (SC) - Tweak Nomination
File:Cinderpelt.star.png I just think the shading could be defined - I can hardly see it and it seems to have no depth. 15:31, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * Looks fine to me.
 * Actually, I've been meaning to put this up for a while. If this passes, I'd like to have it, being the OA and all. :l 17:10, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
 * 'cause Leggo said she wanted to. ouo
 * 01:42 Tue Jul 2

Thunder (L) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Thunder.leader.png I think his white paws are very gray, and need to be made whiter. I'd like it if this passes. 12:26, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 16:14, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Maybe just a little whitening. 21:20 Sun Jun 23
 * 18:03, June 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19:35, 06/30/2013

Leafstar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Leafstar.kit.png (and the others, excluding the queen, of course) She needs to be paler on all her images (except the queen as the blanks are being redone anyway), according to her description. Can I have the warrior, and the kit if the OA dosen't want it, please? 19:15, June 24, 2013 (UTC)


 * If it's possible, I'd like the kittypet and loner, if their OAs don't want them, and if this passes. Bb  un   legs  19:28, June 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Kit and loner are mine, as I still have the files. But I got all the colors from Paleh, so I don't get how they don't match... >.>
 * Has to match description. 21:15 Thu Jun 27
 * 01:42 Tue Jul 2
 * 00:18, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Pixie (KP) ~ Tweak Nomination
FIle:Pixie.kittypet.png Needs a scarred muzzle and yellowing. I'll snag this since I have the file ouo 01:32 Tue Jul 2
 * 00:18, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 04:12 Sat Jul 6
 * 04:12 Sat Jul 6

Dawnstripe (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Dawnstripe.warrior.png Needs a scar on her nose. I'd like this if it passes o3o. Bb un   legs  01:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * 00:18, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 04:20 Sat Jul 6
 * 4:44 Sat Jul 6 2013

Mumblefoot
File:Mumblefoot.elder.png File:Mumblefoot.star.png Needs to be greying. 14:58, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * o i forgot can i have these c: 15:06, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4:34 Sat Jul 6 2013
 * 06:38 Sat Jul 6
 * 06:38 Sat Jul 6

Jay ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Jay.kittypet.png Needs to have mange and a graying muzzle, I believe. Bb un   legs  15:03, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Mine. No exceptions.
 * 23:18, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 4:33 Sat Jul 6 2013
 * 06:38 Sat Jul 6

Newtspeck (A and W) - Tweak Nomination
File:Newtspeck.apprentice.pngFile:Newtspeck.warrior.png - She was said to be a tabby and it doesn't contradict her description, so tabby markings need to be incorporated into her design. I want the apprentice and Mountain can have the warrior since she's the OA. I really don't want to change the design, but x.x 20:34, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Sadly. ;_;
 * <span style="">4:25 Sat Jul 6 2013
 * <span style="">06:42 Sat Jul 6

Pinestar(L, KP, and SC) - Tweak Nomination
File:Pinestar.star.png, File:Pinestar.leader.png, File:Pinestar.kittypet.png needs scarred muzzle, I'd like the Leader. 17:14, July 4, 2013 (UTC) I'd like the StarClan version if the OA doesn't want it and if this passes. 18:03, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * wouldn't the kittypet need to be tweaked too? idk 13:38, July 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think so, seen as he became a kittypet after he was leader. 13:53, July 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * if the kittypet is to be tweaked, I'd like it if the OA doesn't want it, and if it passes Bb  un   legs  15:50, July 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yeah, the kittypet does need it too, adding it now. x3 04:25, July 6, 2013 (UTC)
 * <span style="">4:25 Sat Jul 6 2013
 * <span style="">06:39 Sat Jul 6

07:41, July 6, 2013 (UTC)

Barkface (Star) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Barkface.star.png The shading could be blurred a bit on the stomach and front leg. 16:29, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * Can I take this?
 * Sure Cloudy ^^. 16:36, July 2, 2013 (UTC)
 * THis should also be nominated to change him to dark brown while you're at it. 00:17, July 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * So which means all of them get nominated. If that's the case, the MCA is mine, and I'd also like the MC too, if Paleh doesn't want it. No I'm not being greedy, but trying to keep them around the same shade, and the MCA is mine anyways
 * <span style="">06:36 Sat Jul 6
 * <span style="">01:49 Thu Jul 11
 * I'd like the MC, though I'd like to tweak the shading on that one at the same time too if that's ok, as he looks very shiny and plastic imo. I did an awful job at it. xD

Reedfeather (D) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Reedfeather.deputy.png Needs ragged fur. Also, his tabby pattern is a bit Y-ish. 01:29, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * Could I have this? 17:14, July 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * The stripes are fine. >.>
 * To be honest, I don't think a stripe tweak would go amiss on this. They are rather paintbrush like and unrealistic. His front leg shading may also need a little more of a "highlight" there. This might be a better redo, but a tweak is alright for now. <span style="">02:54 Sat Jul 6
 * Stripes are on the verge, but they'll be okay. <span style="">4:28 Sat Jul 6 2013
 * <span style="">06:39 Sat Jul 6
 * Yeah the stripes are kind of pushing it, but I think for now at least they'll be fine. Though I wouldn't be completely against them being changed more due to the paintbrushy look than the Y style.

Gorseclaw (TC) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Gorseclaw (TC).kit.png and File:Gorseclaw (TC).star.png Both need to have spiky fur - which he's named for. Bb un   legs  01:18, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Could I possibly take these? <span style="">01:29 Thu Jul 11
 * Sounds alright. <span style="">01:53 Thu Jul 11

Tallstar (L, Alt. L) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Tallstar.leader.png File:Tallstar.leader.alt.png I was comparing his tail to Blackstar's tail, and noticed that Tallstar's tail was just barely longer than Blackstar's, and seeing as Tallstar was named for his /tall tail/, it should be extended a bit. I'd like this if Mounty doesn't want it. <span style="">21:54, 07/11/2013
 * Eheheh yeah I'd like to tweak it c: <span style="">22:14, 11, 07, 2013
 * Okie Mountdork<3 <span style="">22:16, 07/11/2013
 * wouldn't the alt leader be tweaked too? 22:18, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Dammit, forgot to add that. Would Mounty like that as well? <span style="">22:28, 07/11/2013
 * If no one else wants it then okay. I've still got the file. <span style="">22:38, 11, 07, 2013
 * I'd like the alt, if it passes, and if Mounty doesn't want it o3o 22:42, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * <span style="">15:57 Fri Jul 12
 * <span style="">03:33, 07/15/2013
 * Why not?

Goosefeather ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Goosefeather.elder.png and others. Needs to have ragged fur 22:31, July 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * May I have the StarClan image if this passes? I still have the file from when I tweaked it for the darker tail-tip. 00:23, July 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * may I have the mc and elder if the OAs don't want them? <span style="">15:56 Fri Jul 12
 * <span style="">03:31, 07/15/2013
 * Don't forget the matted tail and all the other descriptions on his fur. :) <span style="">03:48 Mon Jul 15

Dapplepelt (R) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Dapplepelt.rogue.png * sobs* I wouldn't nominate this normally, but since Dappled Pelt is confirmed to be Dapplepelt, it needs to match her other images 03:23, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * Obviously. <span style="">12:50 Fri Jul 19 2013
 * <span style="">14:19, 07/19/2013
 * ;_;
 * If Mountain doesn't want this, I can take it since I'm the OA of her other images and I can make it match, but only if Mountain doesn't wanna   16:39, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I'd like to do this one. o3o <span style="">23:43, 19, 07, 2013

Sparrowkit - Redo Nomination
File:Sparrowkit.kit.png -prepares to be shot-  The stripes are a bit paintbrushy, he looks almost dark orange, the shading could use definining, and is that even a real lightsource? Also it reminds me quite a bit of Lark before it was redone. If this passes I'd like it. x3 04:22, July 19, 2013 (UTC)


 * <span style="">12:50 Fri Jul 19 2013
 * <span style="">14:19, 07/19/2013
 * 16:12, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Rain That Passes Quickly - Tweak Nomination
File:Rain.tb.png The speckles could be smudged and the shading/highlights need defining. I'd like this if it should pass. x3 04:24, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope.
 * It just doesn't need a full-on redo. <span style="">12:49 Fri Jul 19 2013
 * <span style="">14:20, 07/19/2013
 * 00:41, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Jake ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Jake.kittypet.png If I'm right, he needs a nick in his ear, according to his description. I'd like it if it passes, and if the OA doesn't want it. 21:26, July 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll swipe that. Might I also tweak the coloring so it doesn't look shiny/red?
 * Coloring is fine. <span style="">12:51 Fri Jul 19 2013
 * Coloring's fine. <span style="">14:18, 07/19/2013
 * Actually, he should be completely redone since he's noted to look exactly like Firestar. Just saying. 15:30, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * Hal and Raggedstar are two examples of us doing that, and I'd have no issues redoing my image. If we do it for one, we should do it for the other.
 * I'd support a redo to make him match Firestar. <span style="">02:20 Sat Jul 20
 * 02:30, July 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd also be in favor for a redo to make him match ol' Firestar. 02:35, July 21, 2013 (UTC)