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Petal's and Fox's Mother(Q) - For Approval
hai  19:47, April 1, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes seem kinda paintbrushy...blur or smudge them a bit?

Hmm, I don't know if it's texture or shading, but it looks blotchy. If it's shading can you blurr it please? ^^ 03:17, April 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I didn't do anything with the shading because I'm 99% sure that it's the texture. 21:47, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:25, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

Shading's fine. It's plenty defined. 06:12, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Wonderful job, Duck c: 13:18, April 7, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry, and this has already passed 24 hours, but the stripes still look painbrushy, and the one on the back foot seems like a random stripe was just placed there. I don't think they can go like that... Of course, if I'm wrong, go ahead and approve the image, guys

Re-uploaded Smudged the stripes more, but I will more if I need to and I changed the back leg stripes. 14:26, April 9, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smudge/point the tips of the stripes on the back a bit more? 23:44, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

The way to have the stripes on the tail makes it look as though it's at an odd angle. Can you try to rearrange them, mainly the angle, so that it looks like it's curved toward us? 17:00, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Would anyone mind if I redid the stripes, they're giving me hassle and I wanted to ask first. x3 23:16, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

It's your image, and you don't have a pattern to match. Go right ahead~

Re-uploaded Looks so much better~ 21:32, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit, so that they look less paintbrushy? Bb un   legs  21:35, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? Also, you don't have to blur them, persay. Smudging would do the same thing, depending on how you smudge them. ^^;

Maybe also smudge or blur the lighter chest and face portion? It looks a little too straight of a line of fur, even for a shorthaired cat X3. 23:31, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I blurred the stripes, because Pixlr's smudge tool is a pain. x.x 01:22, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Can you give the stripes on the legs a smudge at the end to point the stripe tip a bit more, they look a bit paintbrushy 03:59, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-upoloaded 23:13, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

She looks a little cross-eyed. Could you move the white pixel in her larger eye to the other side of the pupil? 00:27, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:50, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 04:46, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Define eye depth? 20:09, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

The eyes are fine. If Duck wants to change them, however, he can. It will not affect the CBA, though, as it's far too minor to change the overall quality of the image.

I'm sorry, but I disagree with that. Defining depth anywhere, including the eyes, is a big enough change to break CBA imo. And I agree, it does need to be defined a bit.

Rainswept Flower (R) - CBA
Changes may or may not be showing. I was going to give her black stripes, but when I played with the settings, this came out, and I couldn't bear to change it back. I tried doing this without colorpicking whatsoever, but the shading is giving me fits, ugh. That's what you guys are for, to help me fix it, heh. 01:07, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Can you darken or defing the shading a bit, I'm having trouble seeing it. 22:57, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could blur the pale stomach and back legs into the base pelt some more? 16:57, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Ivy? 03:09, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded yeh GIMP was giving me trouble with the undermarkings 16:40, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Adskjhf So pretty, Ivy! 8D CBA? 22:56, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but could you define exactly where the shading is on the tail, legs, and face? x3 23:07, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, honestly. It shows depth, which is what shading is supposed to do.

I don't quite understand the dark lines on her feet and lower legs. Is it shading that should be blurred more...? This is lovely, Ivy! 23:28, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

The dark lines on her feet are normal markings on brown tabbies, even my own cat has them. Don't worry, they're not random. I'll get on that :) 00:08, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a little? I'm having a hard time telling whwre it is : ) 04:40, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:36, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the end of the tail? 23:12, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Don't know what's wrong here, but the shading looks funky :/ awesome sauce is oozing out of this image this is amazing 02:07, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded and I'd really appreciate it if you didn't call my shading funky, thanks. 03:32, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Well, /that/ was insulting. Ivy, don't listen to them; the shading's just fine. ._. CBA?

I'm really sorry, I should have thought about what I said to such a great charartist like yourself. I really didn't mean for it to sound offensive :c wow, this image is amazing 83 20:37, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Rainleap (Star) ~ For Approval
Long overdue... because no one wanted hurr :3 23:14, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the faces stripes a bit more and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more? 23:53, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to be difficult, but I purposely matched Rainleap's face stripes, though they may be a little dark, to their blurring. If anything, I'd say they need to be blurred more. I'll change them if someone else says something :3 05:21, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

They're a touch too blurred and a little too dark. 16:53, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like pizza.

I think the chest and that little spot of shading between her chin and her shoulder could be blurred a bit. Nice! 01:26, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

I think her stripes may be just a little too dark. 03:25, 04/15/2013

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad? 22:18, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Iight, will be uploading when I can find time! :( seriously teachers need to know we like things other than school really 02:10, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:26, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to rush you guys, but it's been over 24 hours without comment and I really wanted to get in a good starclan kit image when the blanks come out, so critique? 05:57, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a little over-smudged at the ends, perhaps smudge them a tiny bit? 06:02 Sun Apr 21

Sorry Bloo, but you made absolutely no sense to m XD 05:43, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant over-blurred at the ends. 05:50 Mon Apr 22

User's a COPPA violation and got banned. This is declined. Anyone who wants to take over and work on it may do so.

I'll take over. 01:20, 04/24/2013

Re-uploaded Ehh.. Not sure I like how the shading turned out. :\ 01:35, 04/24/2013

Perhaps define the shading on the tail? 07:10 Wed Apr 24

I personally thing the tail shading is fine, but perhaps ass some shading to the upper arm on <--this side? 07:12 Wed Apr 24

Troutclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
- Sorry ;.; It looks bad. It was hard trying to copy Berru's design. It was also hard getting the shading and highlights to cooperate (don't get me started on the matted head thing x.x). I'm not the best at this =o=;; Anyways, comments/concerns? -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 22:32, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the elder more. Nice! Bb un   legs  22:35, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. Beautiful~ 22:36, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Beebs, how about instead of just saying make the stripes "match more", how about giving her suggestions as to how to match them? Anyways, Echo. This is really neat. .o. Perhaps thin out the lineart on the head, and add more of it?

Erase the waste, too? ^^ 22:43, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Removing waste is the bane of my existence now. -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 22:47, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe perhaps made the stripes match more by not blurring them as much? The ones on the elder don't seem to be blurred that much. Bb un   legs  22:49, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Define/darken the darker stripe of color on him, and I believe it is on the wrong side of the tail, too. (correct me if I'm wrong) 22:53, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Try making the mats look more like mats than spikes. I'd say google it, but that's painful to look at... Here's the least painful looking one I found. Matts are round clumps of tangled fur hanging off. And they'd be mostly on his cheeks, not his forehead, since there isn't really enough fur on a cat's forehead to matt up. I'd say his elder image should be tweaked for this as well. (gotta wonder if the Erins realize that a cat just can't live with matted fur... it rips their skin off... and sometimes kills them from either blood loss or infection... and cat in their right mind that's able to do it would groom this stuff off... no? just gonna have an elder known for matted fur on his face? kthen) 22:55, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

He's pretty cool! I like it. As for matching the stripes after unblurring them, darken them a bit, and they are smudged more than blurred. Also, he has a dorsal stripe down his back and tail. Last, the light color on his face wouldn't extend so far on his face, as he has dark stripes around his eyes. Again, great job! 23:15, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

I really like this guy! Define the tail shading a bit and also blur the shading a tad more. Nice, echo! 02:07, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

On his other images he has stripes also going the opposite way as the stripes are going now, blur the shading, he doesn't have a torn ear, and the elder and kit seem to have blue tinted shading. But nice work~ 02:24, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I pretty much edited this last night where I saw only Knight's critique, however, the only reason I didn't use a blue shading is because it looked odd when I did, so I changed the hue to black. -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 23:03, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste in between the paws and next to the ear on our left. Beautiful work, Echo! 13:53, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to fix that ;w; I really hate the transparency on GIMP -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 16:37, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

He's awesome, but needs to match the elder better. If you look at the elder, the stripes go in all directions, they're smudged, not blurred, the're shorter, and more plentifullol i love that word Also, this image seems a lot... shinier than the other images. Do the back stripe in the paintbrush without blurring, make sure it reaches all the way across his back, and on the tail the stripe is on the wrong side. otherwise, good job! 17:20, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely redid tail and back, hopefully changes are showing. --<span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 20:08, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Looks great now! Define paw shading? 23:07, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

The dark parts look more like shading. Could you also try to thicken the stripes just a bit? Good job other than that c: 23:20, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

This doesn't really match. The stripes way to blurred and are leaning the opposite direction that they should. They also need to be more jagged and defined. There's also a stripe running down the back, which I cannot see on this image. The colors are also too dark. I'd recommend color picking from the elder to match it. 20:38, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I'm so sorry you have to go through this the pattern is a butt I'm sorry If you like I can send you the elder's xcf - that has all the colours and opacities and all the fun stuff like shading tints and extra shading layers. <span style="">03:19 Mon Apr 22

You are my saviour. Yes, please xD --<span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 20:41, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Honeyfern (Star) - CBA
Meh... Could've been worse, though I'm not sure I like her either.... 02:19, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

There seem to be specks of waste around the image. Holy crap, Scar. I like this. .o.

Re-uploaded 02:24, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Her other images seem to have more distinct stripes. Could you maybe make them match more? They also seem to be a bit lighter on her others, too. Other than that, a lovely image 8D 20:14, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Could ya' make the stripes a little less greenish to match the warrior? Bb un   legs  20:30, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:56, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

This is gorgeous, Scarfy! I'd blur the little whiskers that are in her ears a tiny bit :3 --<span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 21:18, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:24, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes on the warrior appear smaller and more defined. 20:35, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:39, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

No comments for a while...so CBA? ouo 23:32, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Smallear (Star) ~ For Approval
Well. Comments for improvement on Smallear? 12:37, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Beautiful<3 Shoon Derp Like  nobody's  around~ 13:04, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:07, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail highlight and blur the haunch shading. Bb un   legs  16:30, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define forepaw shading. smudge earpink a bit more. is the chest shading misplaced? lol his ears look hilarious 17:28, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Pretty~ i love the eyes<33 I'd thicken the shading on the haunch or add highlights o3o It looks sorta blotchy. --<span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 20:09, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The chest shading is actually in the right place; it flows with my light source. And it took me a while to get his ears to look decent, so saying they 'look hilarious' is kind of hurtful. @Bramblewind  18:29, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a tiny bit on the front paw, to our right? Shoon Derp Like  nobody's  around~ 18:39, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Future projects call~ If he's not been claimed after I finish my next project, I'll pick 'im up again. 18:52, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I've always liked this image. May I take over? 20:50, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sure! Would you like me to send you the file? 21:16, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, no, I'm good. Thank you though! 22:26, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fastest charart ever! I used the lineart I gave Cinder a while back. There was a comment then to make that right ear curve more, so I tweaked that. Suggestions for improvement for Smallear? 23:02, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a wee bit? I know it's artist's choice, but it looks darker than the other charart's shading. If you don't want to, that's cool with me. Bb un   legs  23:03, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lightened it up a wee bit. I also noticed he looked rather dark. :) 00:55, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit? This is great Bb  un   legs  21:43, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks, blurred the haunch shading. 00:01, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Blossomkit (Star) - For Approval
First white cat. Comments? 21:17, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC).star.png. 21:21, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

How? It won't let me. 21:28, April 21, 2013 (UTC)



Does it make sense taht i made more nicely? Spaniel78CP (talk) 22:23, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Span, it doesn't matter;Sorrel reserved it first, the image is her's. Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 22:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

In all honesty, I prefer Sorrel's image ouo;; Anyways, Sorrel, this is beautiful! It seems that there's a background or something outside the image. Couldja erase that? --<span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> Echo Harkness  <span style="background-color:#9508D0; border:2px solid #000000; -moz-border-radius:6px; -webkit-border-radius: 15px; background-image:-webkit-gradient(linear, left top, right top, from(#9AFEFF), to(#307D7E));background-image:-moz-linear-gradient(top,#000000,#154776); -webkit-box-shadow: 2px 2px 8px rgba(112,94,160,20);" !style="color:#000000;""> "I was just saying hello!" 23:22, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel, just re-upload it as a new file and mark the old one for deletion. 03:27, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Echo, she can't make her background transparent. Sorrel, if you'd like, once your image is approved, I can take care of that for you~

'Kay, sorry, but for what infinite reason can Sorrel not make the background transparent? It's a simple process that takes no more than a few minutes and is super easy to learn. It's ridiculous that she cannot make a transparent background considering the art she has done. I honestly do not think that this should be approved with the background like that. She needs to learn how to do it herself, it's not that hard. Add some depth to the eyes and define the tail shading a bit. 03:47, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

'teldy, it's Pixlr, not her. ._. It often does that for people. I've had that issue myself, honestly. No need to get snippy about it.

'Reuploaded' Alright, teldy. It's not my fault. Pixlr dosen't let me save so I have to copy paste it. This is a permanant problem, I'm afraid - so thank you, kelsey, do make it transparent once its approved. I've stated this background problem many times. >.< Renamed, eye depth and tail defined. 14:41, April 22, 2013 (UTC)


 * Yeah, no, sorry. I do not accept that excuse. Even paint has the ability to make something transparent. In fact, there are several other ways to solve this problem than relying on someone else to complete the job for you. It's fine if it's just a first and you're experimenting with digital art, but considering how far you come, there really is no excuse for you not to be able to find a way to make something transparent. Go talk to multiple artists, look it up on youtube, convert to another digital art program, etc. There are copious more ways to approach this situation than sitting there and begging for help with one of the simple steps of making digital art. 22:08, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Its no excuse! I'm serious! And I am not begging. 22:21, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel, if you need any help with Pixlr, I can help you, I've been using that program for quite awhile now, Anyways define the unshaded parts on the tail. Also, Echo please do not say that you prefer one image over another, I find that very rude, and it would lower my self-esteem if that was said to myself. owo 22:43, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not doubting that Pixlr doesn't work for you with transparency, I use the diction of "excuse" as an expression of curiosity as to why you have not figured out an alternative method. You said you copy and paste the image. On to what? MS Paint? Because there are ways to do transparency on MS Paint. Or ask someone else who does Pixlr like Duck offered, in fact on the "front page" of PCA where the mentor program is, it shows you specific people who use Pixlr and want to help other users. You don't need to be an apprentice to go ask a mentor for help. That's why they're there, as a reference for specific people (apprentices) and for anyone who's having a bit of difficulty with something. The fact of the matter is that I do not want to see you be held back from this one simple obstacle. 23:12, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define eye depth and tint shading because it looks a little gray. No need to attack sorrel for sorrel's pixlr's issue, this is an easy problem to fix if you simply tell her how. Just download gimp here, paste the image into the gray screen with the fox in the background (don't hit new, just paste into the window), use the paint bucket with a bright unused color to fill in the background. Hit the background with the tool with the three colored boxes and the pointer finger and the background should be outlined with dashed lines. hit delete and save the image, tadaa. Everyone okay? yay. you're welcome. ;P 01:13, April 23, 2013 (UTC)


 * Except not everyone can download GIMP, nor does everyone want to. 01:19, April 23, 2013 (UTC)


 * How do we know sorrel isn't willing to download GIMP? Before we try to come to conclusions, let's see what Sorrel is willing to do. 02:24, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

I think Sorrel's already said something about not being able to download GIMP? Anyways, can we shift the focus back to the image, please? Is the entire tail supposed to be in shadow, Sorrel? If not, could you possibly add a highlight or two? Or just erase some shading; either method will work.

Reuploaded Teldy, when you say 'ms paint' do you mean this? 14:56, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made the shading less grey a bit more. 15:01, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Yep. 20:11, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) (Star) ~ For Approval
Shading was killing me. Comments? 22:14, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit? It looks a bit flat. 22:15, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''The shading looks dark because of the texture. 23:16, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Make the texture match the kit more? It's not as, erm, "mottle-y" as this texture. Bb un   legs  23:17, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sort of unsure about that. Usually, with the texture, if I put it at brush size 1, the texture won't show. I'm not sure I'f I can match much more. 23:19, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Good point on the texture. I'd say...perhaps sharpen it a bit, and that'll do the trick. Also, define the highlight/unshaded part on the legs, and there's a little waste on the charart by her tail. Lovely image! Those awesome eyes. *.* 23:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thank you, Knight. I could show you how, if you'd like. 23:48, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the tail. Lookin good. 06:40, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Skt. 20:42, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Mosskit (Star) - For Approval
My baby ;w; <3 22:14, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? It doesn't look so dark on the kit. Bb un   legs  22:59, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  23:07, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

White on paws, body, and tail are very gray 23:40, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

it's because of the shading, but if someone else thinks the white needs to be defined, I'll fix it. o3o 23:42, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, her haunch and tail shading do look a little thick, and just a bit too dark, compared to the kit image. And there's a stripe of white missing on her chest. Lovely image! 01:09, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Also, maybe make the patches a bit more hard-edged like the kit. She looks awesome. ouo 04:42, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Mosskit (Alt. Star) ~ For Approval
Comments? 22:46, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Erm, I think you forgot to add the date to the reserve. Anyways, define the shading a bit? Bb un   legs  22:49, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I just added it. I think the shading's fine, but if anyone else agrees, I'll change it. 23:02, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I think define wise it's okay, just lighten it on the chest a very small tad, please. 22:52, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:02, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree with Thistle. I think it should be defined a bit.

Reuploaded. Layers somehow merged on my .xcf, so I had to start over. I preffered the old one. Don't think changes are showing. 21:44, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I think she's too dark. She looks black, and the alt kit is much lighter than this.

Mistkit (TC) (Star) ~ For Approval
00:10, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! Maybe define chest shading? 21:46, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:41, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Is it just my durn contacts, or is it a bit blue-grey? Man, this is incredible, and her eyes are amazing 02:15, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

It doesn't look blue-gray to me. O.o 02:31, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

It's the same as the kit...so no blue-grey. 06:28, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Oddfoot-Kit~For Approval
Starclan, these blanks suck...

And the foot looks terrible too. And I'm not even gonna start on the shading...<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 11:00, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Can you match the stripe pattern more, and make his face, chest and belly paler, like the warrior? 15:00, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sure, lemme just finish what I'm doing first<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 15:30, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I would just say to make the twisted paw point inward instead of to his other forepaw. 21:24, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'll add to Sorrel's comment of matching stripes: Could you kind of sharpen them up, and add several more around the charart, then smudge them, like the warrior image? Also, extend the "m" on his forehead up a little, to make it longer. Pfft. He looks cool. 01:04, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

The light source on the head is different than the rest of the body. Move it so that it casts shadow on the right side of his face and light on the left. 04:40, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't do anything else with those stripes. I fixed the stripes, the foot, and the shading.<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 08:38, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

It needs a transparent background, there's an unfilled pixel on the top of the head, and there needs to be a pale belly, muzzle, and paws. Also, stripes need to match the warrior more, in where they're placed and how they're smudged. <span style="">12:19, 04/23/2013

Okay. The background isn't transparent though? I remember making it transparent...<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 14:02, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a wee bit, too? It looks too dark. 18:36, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Eaglekit (Star) ~ For Approval
Oh, here we go, hope this looks okay. Comments? Bb un   legs  21:12, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Fixed his shading up a bit. Bb un   legs  21:23, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I think the chest highlight looks wierd. And the shading on the tail is a bit odd. 21:26, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  21:32, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Could you make the chest highlight a little bigger, instead of a little dot there? Love this character~ 01:06, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. This highlight is now the bane of my existence x.x. Bb  un   legs  01:11, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Really don't get the tail highlight 02:02, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Also define eye depth. 02:16, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine, honestly.

So what do I do to the tail? Bramble's comment didn't specify what to do to it. Bb un   legs  21:43, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

I think she was  trying to say the make the tail highlight... make sense? Because it looks like it's been quatered colour wise, each highlight and shadow diagonal of each other. I can't explain things like this, I know. x3 21:59, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Okay, how's this? Bb un   legs  22:16, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the chest highlight 01:18, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) (Ki) -  For Approval
Comments on Rushtail? <span style="">21:19 Mon Apr 22

Ah, I don't really know how to say this, but make the stripes match more? They're more wavy-ish than thin-y on the warrior. Bb un   legs  21:21, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, I re-did the stripe pattern. I hope this is better. <span style="">21:27 Mon Apr 22

Could you rearrange the stripes on the chest so that they go horizontally, like on the warrior? Pretty~ 04:36, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">05:21 Tue Apr 23

Define the shading just a little bit? If you don't want to, that's cool with me. This is an amazing image~

Re-uploaded. Darkened it a tad, otherwise I can't see the stripes. <span style="">07:23 Wed Apr 24

Darkstar (SC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Ehhhhhh.

No eh's >:c Darken the shading on the chest just a tad? 22:32, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Wee~ He be sexy. Can you smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more and maybe define the depth in the eyes a tiny bit more? 01:06, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think the chest shading is fine. Also, Scar, I can't really define the depth in the eyes, with them being a milky yellow color; it doesn't give you much to work with.

The depth can be defined plenty while keeping the eyes still milky colored. We went over this when the leader was being put up. Adding more depth doesn't mean they have to not be milky anymore. They're rather flat imo right now.