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Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:09, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Try...Making the floof more fluffy and shaggy. It looks spikey now. :S 18:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Dazzly? o3o 09:59, 14, 06, 2012

Uhm...withdrawing. ^^; *is no good at floofs* 10:12, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3 16:54, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. ^^ 05:45, 15, 06, 2012

Add a little more floof on the haunch. 22:35, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, Silver only just took over and hasn't uploaded yet. Please don't comment if she still hasn't uploaded... 05:02, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ohmaigawsh I killed it ;3;. 23:33, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Add more floof, or define it. =3 23:43, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. 21:01, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? 21:08, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And do kittypet kits need a collar...? I can't remember x.x 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

He wasn't a kittypet, he was a rouge or something, he was part of BloodClan as a kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 22:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Unsure on changes. 22:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 22:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Kill ze waste. 22:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the black a tad. 02:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiiiny bit lighter, so the white is lighter. (But then you might have to define the shading on the back. Doesn't make sence. =_=) 07:19, 08, 06, 2012

Re-Ups^ @Dazzy, I'd rather not smudge because it doesn't look smudged on the rogue and loner images. 21:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is kind of flat... Can you define the lightsource? 14:17, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Black and White cat shading. e.e 18:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks flat. Define the 'highlight' and enlarge it, and darken the shading. 18:37, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I tried by best. e.e 17:54, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on ---> side. Skt Spoilers... 02:57, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

It may be just me, but there seems to be darker colored squares on the chest... ouo 03:49, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it too, but it looks like a square of lighter pixels. owo Also define the shading on the white. Skt Spoilers... 04:10, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, my computer account is being spazzy and I can't log into it, and that's where I have all my files. e.e I will possibly be able to fix it though. 20:00, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (Ki) - Redone
You are looking at failure. So hard to draw dem stripes on dis small, cute, little, adorable kit blank! Meh. Redone to match other images. Comments? 04:49, 09, 06, 2012

Define the shading. Nicely done.

Adorable <3 Maybe blur the stripes a Tiny bit, And possibly make his base coat more, cream? Not sure if thats the right word, more like his other images, looks a bit pink to me. -- 06:04, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. ^^ Raven, I wasn't quite sure what you ment, so I just airbrushed the coat color with a lighter, pinkish color a bit. 06:23, 10, 06, 2012

Define the shading more, and perhaps thin it out a bit as the color looks off cause of it. Also, where's your light source? I can't quite tell. 09:19, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit? 19:33 Sun Jun 10

Reuploaded -  Just redid the shading. 02:37, 11, 06, 2012

There's a little bit of waste around his tail. 19:26, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:58, 12, 06, 2012
 * Changes ain't showing. 06:02, 12, 06, 2012

I'm not sure if it's the base pelt or the shading, but he looks too dark. lighten the shading if it's that~ Skt Spoilers... 13:21, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I believe it's the shading. x3 09:10, 14, 06, 2012

Still doesn't match.... not sure what to tell you, if it's the shading. Maybe thin it out even more. 06:15, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I'd lighten the shading some more, but also thin out the head stripes. 22:42, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Err... this image irks me, the shading, the stripes, the colors. x.x  06:24, 16, 06, 2012

Reuploaded Changed colors to match. 04:24, 17, 06, 2012

Can you define the shading just a tad? >.<  14:59, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Near the top of the tail looks like some miscolored pixels. Can you fix those? 19:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur stick out more like the other images, rather then curve a bit. It should basically stand on end, like he got electrocuted or something. 22:50, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not good at tail tweaking... o3o Withdrawn. 22:59, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 99.58.201.247 23:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * That was me. o.e  23:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur at the base of the tail stick out more. 23:02, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, please don't critique the charart if the user taking over hasn't uploaded yet. 05:40, 16, 06, 2012

Reuploaded I tried :P  02:35, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (A) - Redone
Added a new layer of shading. Comments? 22:46, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly lighten the shading by the tail a bit? 22:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Eh. The shading on this is really iffy....Icy, if you want to re-do it, that way it won't get tweaked in the future for the same thing, go right ahead.

Re-Uploaded: Shading on gray and white apprentices is hard... 23:51, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the kit. The kit isn't being redone, therefore the pattern stays. 23:54, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Fail on my part. 00:01, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Move the white on the tail to the other side, make the white on the face centered like the kit, shrink the white on the haunch a bit, and get rid of the white on the shoulder that's connected to the chest. 00:10, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 00:22, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste by his face. And if you can, could you darken the shading a little? Breeze whisker  02:39, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pattern still doesn't quite match. Try copying it from the old apprentice image. The pattern from there was fine, it was just the shading that needed changing. 04:29, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

This was ment to be tweaked, not redone. x.x If this stays up, make the tail gray go all the way to the end of the lineart, get rid of the gray inbetween the eyes down to the nose, bring the gray down to the haunches and belly and there seems to be some stray shading (dunno the word xD) around the haunches and front left forearm. :/ <span style="">09:42, 14, 06, 2012

There's some stray waste on his spine and between his haunch and tail. =P 15:22, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste beside his face -- 23:07, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Acornleaf, please don't repeat what has already been said. 23:09, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

DJ, I gave her permission to re-do it. ^^;; It's perfectly fine, and it would be much better off as a redo.

Re-Uploaded: Changed pattern to match Misty's apprentice. If I darken the shading, it looks weird. ._. 17:47, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

owo Define the tail shading just a bit. 06:05, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Defined tail shading. 14:50, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 16:40, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

If I blur it it will blend in with the pelt and if I define it, it'll look weird. 16:42, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

There is this weird strip of something on his tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 17:04, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

That "weird strip" is white. And I'm not chnaging it, it's part of the pattern. 17:07, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

No, not the white, it's on the gray. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 17:08, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

The "Weird strip" is shading; and it's fine. And next time, please try to refrain from using the word "weird" to describe something when commenting on an image in case "weird" offends someone. =.= 19:47, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Your light source is confusing me. Some parts, such as the face, make it look as though it's coming from the upper right, while the body looks as though it's coming from the from front of the cat, and yet the tail makes it look as though it's coming more from behind. Could you define your light source? Breeze whisker  04:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Q) ~ Tweaked
I added stripes. I don't know who the OA was but it was tweaked for shading by Scarly. Comments? 00:24 Sat Jun 16

Can you lighten the stripes to match the warrior and alt. queen more? 00:43, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:49 Sat Jun 16

Lighten the stripes up a tad, and if that's a stripe and not a speckle I see on the forehead, right below her fluff, remove it. 09:50, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:22 Sat Jun 16

Blur them stripes so that they blend better with the flecks. Breeze whisker  04:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Rather not blur them any more. 04:18 Sun Jun 17

Nightwing (W) - Tweaked
It might looked redone but it's not actually. I just re-did the shading, played around with the earpink, and fixed the eyes. I was the OA. Comments? 01:49, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Without anypony telling me, I just thought the highlights were too bright. 01:51, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit? x3 <span style="">03:20, 17, 06, 2012

No. Believe me, I've tried. But it doesn't work. 03:23, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the highlights more? 15:00, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Toned down highlights. 17:41, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Snow (TB) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed definition. owo OA was Splook. Comments? 05:13, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that shading on her back leg and butt area. =P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 00:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:28, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA was me. I redid the stripes and the shading. Everything else is the same.

Define the shading a tad. 18:23, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

If possible, could you add a few more stripes on the side of her head? It looks sorta empty. Breeze whisker  04:07, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, actually. This is how I have the design set on all four of her images, and I usually make my broken tabbies like this.

Sorry I agree with Breeze. 09:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I'm not changing it. I prefer to keep the stripes like this. It's my pattern, and this is how I'd like it.

I disagree. The stripes are /fine/. 17:34, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Whitetail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be short haired. Do I need to change the earpink? 18:57, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (W) - Tweaked
I killed it. >:D OA was me. I wanted to kill the shading. Comments? 00:13, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shading's fine.

Splash (Lo) (KP) - Redone
Black was pure black and shading needed to be redone. OA was Darkhallows. Comments? 00:20, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 00:28, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tis as much as I can blur it. 00:53, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

You might want to make the patch on the back more centered along the cat's spine to match how the loner appears. Breeze whisker  04:01, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, what? *didn't quite understand that* 09:15, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

She means move the white patch on the back and make it centered on the spine to match the loner. ouo 10:01, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. Kit) ~ Redone
I was given permission from Paleclaw to tweak her beautiful kit image. OA was Rainbreath. All I touched was the tail. Comments? 00:44, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe fluff out the fur around the wound a little bit? It looks blocky and oddly solid for a long-haired tail. Breeze whisker  04:03, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This blank is so awkwardly small.... 04:24, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the cutoff a bit more like the warrior. As in maybe a bit fluffier and puffing out some more. >w< 10:11, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

This would be fairly recently after his tail got cut off...the fur wouldn't be quite so long and able to puff out. 17:12, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Supposed to be working on Echosong but I've been meaning to get this off of the list. OAs were Mistyheart and Rainwillow. I burned off the highlighs (the shading placement didn't make sense), added new highlighs, added shading, and changed the color to more yellow like her apprentice. Comments? 06:18 Sun Jun 17

Blur the shading in between the forelegs a bit. owo 08:32, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes/make them darker to match her apprentice image? 15:01, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading between the forelegs looks fine. Cats don't really have much of a chest. You might add some shading on the neck, though. Breeze whisker  16:37, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Defined the stripes and the neck shading. I've tried to blur the shading on the forelegs but it disappears. 17:40 Sun Jun 17

Hailstar (A) ~ Tweaked
I got permission from Scarlet to redo the shading, before anybody tells moi that I shouldn't have. Tweaked for teh blotchy shading. OA was Paddie. Comments? 12:51, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

His nose should be grey~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 12:53, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a little, if you can. Breeze whisker  17:43, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (E) ~ Tweaked
Redid the stripes and the shading. OA of the most recent version is me. Don't tell me to change the opacity of the stripes or the pale parts. They're the exact same thing as the loner, as are the colors.

Pebble (TB) ~ Redone
First time doing mud, and first time doing a To-be, The last one to have edited her was Paleclaw. Her shading and the mud needed to be redone. 17:22, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. 17:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened the shading. -- 17:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D) - Tweaked
needed shading defined. original artist was Shelly. comments? <span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   17:33, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lilystem (Q) - Tweaked
Shading needed blurring. OA was Darkhallows. Breeze whisker  17:40, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading as well? Not a whole lot, but just enough so it's a bit easier to see. ( thank you this image bothered me so damn much )