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Spottedleaf ~ Silver Nomination
Her article looks good comments? 17:17, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Perhaps expand Spottedleaf's Honest Answer, Forest of Secrets, and in the first series, you might want to add a what she is doing in the dreams. Mainly just A Dangerous Path, and Rising Storm. At el  da  19:25, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

SkyClan's Destiny could also be expanded a bit, as well as Dawn. Also expand ^what Atelda said^, and it will be ready! xD 22:40, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

ok I expanded Spottedleaf's Honest answer, Rising Storm, Dawn and a dangerous path. I don't own all the books so I'll try to do what I can for Skyclan's destiny and Forest of Secrets but I might take a bit longer, and I couldn't word Spottedleaf's Honest answer quite right, if some could please help with that 19:24, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

does it look ok?

Comments???

Please, be patient. Many of us are extremely busy since its the end of the year and we all have a lot of schoolwork. Can SotC be expanded any more? And do you think you could go into more detail for The Fourth Apprentice? 22:12, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

sorry those were a day apart the dates just don't show 02:23, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur for family needs a reference, otherwise, I don't see anything else wrong. Good job. ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 19:24, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

The Power of Three and Omen of the Stars sections need to be expanded, they look short and choppy. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  00:00, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

they are short because she only appears briefly in dreams I'll see what I can do though 19:05, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

The Darkest Hour and New Prophecy Series looks really choppy. It's all smushed into one big paragraph. 20:49, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed some of the wording on Bluestar's Phophecy and also fixed the tense since it switched around. I'll look to see if there's anymore of that. 14:24, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

The ref#14 isn't cited correctly. You can see that if you go down to the references. I'll go see if I can fix it. 18:06, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I fixed it, no worries! 18:09, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

ok I expanded Skyclans Destiny, The Fourth Apprentice, Long shadows, Eclipse, Twilight and, The Sight added a family refrence for Ashfur and split up sections into paragraphs. comments? 06:58, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

SkyClan's destiny should be in separate paragraphs, and there are a few grammar/spelling issues. 17:01, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I split skyclan's D into two paragraphs and fixed all the spelling/grammer issues I could find comments? 18:07, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's still tons of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes, but I'll fix those. 18:10, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, there's lots. I'll fix some too. 18:27, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed some, but there's still a lot more. 18:32, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

ok I fixed a lot more spelling issues 22:26, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but there's still more. This will take a while to fix... 22:30, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll try to fix some more, but this will take some time to fix. 22:45, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

ok I used spell check the only things spelled wrong according to the online dictionary are the cat names and such, as for the grammer sorry guys I'm trying I really am english is not my strong suit it's more like math 05:04, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand Sunrise, Secrets of the Clans and Code of the Clans? 06:26, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

sunrise ok but I don't have sercrets of the clans or code of the clans 16:18, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I will try to find code of the clans and expand it. Silvermoon☾

Really? Yeah, math's my strong suit too. I'll go on fixing some grammar mistakes. 17:51, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I fixed all the grammar mistakes! Took a while to read through the whole thing! :P Anyway, if someone could proofread it anymore, that would be great! 18:18, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

thanks a lot squirrelflame! umm is it ready? can we CBV this soonish? sorry I'm not trying to rush but I am going on a two week camp (no computer) starting on the 20th but Atelda agreed to take over if it isn't ready in time. so sorry my first nomination too! so comments? 22:28, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I guess it looks ok! Any other comments? 22:46, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Into the Wild should be expanded and its style should be fixed. 16:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is a stupid question, but what is style? 16:22, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reworded SHA a little bit, and made a few other minor changes. 09:09, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Style is basically the way its written. The paragraphs of Into the Wild are short and stiff, and they should be flowed together better, in addition to being expanded. 16:49, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Moonflight. The Into the Wild section should be expanded and make a little more sense. Spottedstar42 The WWi ki van dals Mu st fall!!!  16:58, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok expanded, reworded, and reworked the Into the Wild section. I reworded some of the SHA section too. 18:34, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better now! 21:07, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I also expanded Firestar's Quest, comments? 23:25, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you try to expand Forest of Secrets, Sunrise, and Night Whispers? It's ok if you can't; I know she doesn't appear a lot. 15:01, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Done, done, and done. I also expanded a bit Shattered Peace, and Long Shadows. 02:43, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this looks a lot better from when it first started! Can you expand the field guides more? Once again, it's ok if you can't. 16:06, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

I really don't see any more you can do! The article is great :) 14:25, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... unfortunately I don't have either of the field guides right now for I lent them out to some friends. Would someone like to help? 03:58, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

I can help if I have time. Besides the field guides, the article looks great! =D 07:51, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Larchkit ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote, but there wasn't any other quote. 21:44, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a quote by the narrator that describes her? 21:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try... I don't know if I can find one, though. 01:42, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

I added one about Dustpelt's reaction to her death. I guess it's ok since it shows how others liked the character. 01:51, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Moonrise, it seems a bit short. 08:21, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

She died in Moonrise, so there isn't anything to add. I added a few more sentences, though. 19:44, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I know she died quite early, but I think you could find some way to expand it, especially Twilight's section. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  19:55, June 12, 2011 (UTC)I

I only added one sentence. I did a search in the book for Larchkit and there was only one result where she was mentioned. The other books are quite similar, with only one or two references. 20:57, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! I think its ready. 19:59, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think it could use a different main quote. . . the current one is bothering me. It's just Ferncloud telling her kits to stop doing who-knows-what, it doesn't really say anything about the character or anything else, for that matter. 22:30, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I tried to find a better quote, but there isn't anything else with Larchkit in it. I think the quote is fine because it shows that Larchkit is adventurous and does things that gets her in trouble a lot. 23:28, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think its fine. :D 17:14, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Any other comments? 15:53, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job. I see nothing wrong with it. 18:39, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Will this be CBVed after some votes are over, too? 23:21, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, it looks great to me. 02:00, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Same here! 04:44, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 16:08, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 20:12, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Dustpelt ~ Silver Nomination
I think it's ready! Anything else needed? 21:34, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand Sign of the Moon? 22:06, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

expand twilight, long shadows, the fourth apprentice and night whispers 07:03, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can Code of the Clans be expanded? 17:07, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try. It's going to take a while, though. I'll say when it's done. 18:26, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded them all as well as I could. I can't expand Code of the Clans, though because I don't have the book and I can't get it off HarperCollins either. Can someone please help? 19:47, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded Code of the clans as much as I could. Hope I helped XD 21:37, June 15, 2011 (UTC)T

Thanks! It really helped! =) Anything else? 22:54, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the last paragraph of The darkest Hour. You could mention the parts he fights in the battle. Looks great! 17:08, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't mention him a lot in the battle, just that he fought alongside Sandstorm. I added it in. Anything else? 19:15, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

The last paragraph in The Fourth Apprentice could be expanded a little, but otherwise it looks good! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:22, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Any other comemnts? 02:05, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any places where he is mentioned in the fight in Fire and Ice? 01:01, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

There's a fight in Fire and Ice? And even if there is, he isn't mentioned so I can't do anything there. 16:28, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! CBV? 16:09, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 20:12, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanstar - Silver Nomination
He looks good to me. :3 21:54, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Was he seen in any other books? Other than that maybe expand it a bit more? It looks great! 22:12, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

add one more quote and expand code of the clans if possible 07:00, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

He wasn't in any other books, but I think Code of the Clans could be expanded a bit more; just add some more details. xD 17:12, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, expand it a bit more, but other than that I see nothing wrong! 22:57, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just to let you all know, I'm still working on this. I've just been kind of busy lately. :3 But I'll get to this tomorrow. The power is off at the moment, but somehow the internet still works. 01:25, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, that's weird! :P 04:12, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added a little more to his article, but that's all I could get. 14:26, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I think it looks great! 20:45, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 05:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Songbird ~ Silver Nomination
I added all the quotes I could find, and expanded her history. Comments? 22:02, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change the main quote with one of the quotes below? The main quote right now doesn't seem to describe her, but if that's the only one that fits as her main quote, then never mind. Good job! =D

Can you get rid of the last quote or add a better background for it? It doesn't seem to say anything. 15:52, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...those were all the quotes I could find, including the narrator ones. Changed the main quote, deleted last quote. Anything else? 16:18, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add some more details to expand? It's ok if you can't, she's a very minor character. 19:06, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Added. Comments? 19:30, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Snowdazzle  ROAD TRIPPP!! 22:50, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think there's anything else to fix. Good job Mistystar! 02:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Great job. I see nothing wrong with this! 01:08, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Same. 04:31, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 05:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
There are quotes and I'm expanding it right now. Comments? ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 19:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any quotes that Blossomkit actually says? All the quotes currently are Rock's perspective on Blossomkit. The article had a few grammar things that I fixed, but other than that, it looks good! 21:25, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cats of the Clans is all from a narrative point of view which is Rock, plus there is absolutly no dialogue in the book at all. Thanks for the grammar check! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:30, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry about that! Silly me. :P Looks great! 23:07, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

xD No problem, thanks! Comments? 17:49, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add one more quote that shows her personality? Other than that, it looks great! 15:54, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, done! Any other comments? 18:42, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's ready! I see nothing wrong with it. :) 21:09, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

There was a typo at the bottom ;) Fixed. Well done angel. lol :P 08:24, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lol! Thanks! Comments? 19:00, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 05:01, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Cloversplash ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote, which was the only thing she ever said or was said about her, and expanded CotC as much as possible. Comments? 17:26, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any quotes that others said about her? Or a quote from the narrator? It looks kind of empty with =out any quotes at the bottom. 21:10, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Are extremely minor articles supposed to be nominated? We had a discussion here about a character with just one line in the series and it was declined. 08:14, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

They should get nominations. If they appear only in the alligiances, then a nomination isn't necessary. 17:50, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Well, there aren't any more quotes I can add. Comments, then? 18:41, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Still looks empty, but I guess it's ok! 02:19, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

It does look empty, but I guess that's ok because it is said that she is an extremely minor character. So yeah, it's ok! 04:41, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! =D 11:50, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Snow Falling on Stones ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded SotM, and added all the quotes that are related to her in any way. Comments? 18:25, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a few grammar things. Are you sure you can't expand it a little bit more? Maybe add some more detail? 21:12, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Added Snow to the main quote. It said "Night in SotM". If there's nothing else, then it looks quite good to me. 08:12, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, thanks for fixing the main quote! I can't expand any more, though. 18:50, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I see nothing wrong. 21:18, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 02:20, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Driftkit ~ Silver Nomination
His page looks awesome! Comments? 11:20, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find one more quote? I like it when there's at least three quotes at the bottom. I fixed a few grammar things and the article looks great! 16:07, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, find one more quote, and it should be ready! 18:56, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

I added one more quote. Anything else? 10:25, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Not really. :P I think its ready! 16:09, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Nice job, Rainey. 22:46, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is that all? Oh, and thanks! =D 01:52, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I think so. This will probably be CBVed once more votes are over. 16:10, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Probably.... 09:03, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfur - Silver Nomination
This should have never been declined. Well, before then, we didn't decide that only allegiance-only characters do not need a nomination, so, here it is. 18:12, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you find another quote? If not, supporting! 18:54, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Found three. 20:49, June 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Derp. It was Crowclaw that was declined. Too many Crow- names... 21:11, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good. 21:13, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

There was a typo in the quote that I fixed, but other than that, looks great! 02:23, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! This will be CBVed once more votes are closed. :P 15:47, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lion's Roar - Silver Nomination
All that really needed to be done was add a few quotes. The history is unexpandable because Lion's Roar only appears on two pages of Sign of the Moon. 20:35, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good to me. 21:11, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Same. 21:19, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! 02:24, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once more votes are closed... 15:49, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good to me! 04:42, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  02:17, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Crowclaw - Silver Nomination
He's been declined earlier, but I just asked Moon, and as she says that every character with something more than in their history can be nominated, I'm nominating Crowclaw. Comments? 21:10, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any other mentions later in the discussion? Otherwise, it looks great! 21:21, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is that the only quote? Other than that, looks great! 02:27, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

To my knowledge, Crowclaw is mentioned only once and has only one line in the series. 04:19, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then it looks awesome! :D 16:03, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 22:46, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Adderpaw ~ Silver Nomination
The vote is supposed to be up for Hollykit, so I might as well do this one. Comments? 02:52, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

I can't find any other quotes, so please don't ask about that. 03:02, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! =D 10:26, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but you can only have 3 nominations at a time here, and the vote counts. You'll have to wait 4 more days to put this up. 15:45, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok then. I'd appreciate it if no one took this away from me. 22:47, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, my votes are over, so I'm starting this again. Comments? 18:11, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good. 18:30, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (CotC) - Silver Nomination
I might as well nominate him now. I'll find a few quotes for him. 20:38, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * No more quotes could be found. 20:45, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if there's no more quotes, and it can't be expanded, I think it looks great! 22:48, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Palefoot ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? -Sunheart- 03:13, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand it a bit more? I don't like the main quote too much, so can you change that too? I think the last quote on the page would make a better main quote. 16:13, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Changed main quote and expanded some. -Sunheart- 08:57, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded it more, incorporating information from some of the quotes. Looks good! Can you find another quote? 20:54, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, find another quote. If you can't, then never mind. Looks awesome! =D 09:02, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Splashnose ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? I'm adding in some quotes in a bit, so don't worry. xD 03:32, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think quotes are really the only things you need. :) 04:10, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Added the quotes! Comments? 08:39, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

If it can't be expanded, I think it looks good! 17:56, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Content Drive
Poor Thornclaw. He's been our content drive for six months, but he's barely changed. I think it's time for a new content drive. What do you all think? 04:37, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Do you have any new characters in mind for our new content drive Moonflight? I'm dying to know. xD 08:40, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

I personally think that Onestar should be our new content drive. He's quite a major character, but his history needs major expansion. 14:10, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar looks good! What are we going to do with Thornclaw now, just leave him? 17:57, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Someone can probably nominate Thronclaw silver now. As for the content drive, I agree it should be Onestar. 07:49, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all I could expand, and added some quotes. Comments? 18:13, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks Good! Can you expand Into the Wild, Forest of Secrets and Midnight. Also, find a ref for Squirrelflight being his mate if possible. 20:23, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

I can't expand Into the Wild or Forest of Secrets anymore due to the fact that he only shows up once on Into the Wild, and there, too, he doesn't do anything. In Forest of Secrets, he isn't even mentioned. I expanded Midnight a bit more, but it's not possible to expand that anymore. But I found the citation! Anything else? 21:33, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Shoot! I'll have to temporarily close this too. I forgot the voting counts. Please don't take this from me. 23:24, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Join
May i Join Project Characters! 19:08, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Of course you may join! Welcome to the project! See the FAQ if you have any questions. 20:33, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

thanx 20:34, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

PLEASE CAN I BE IN THE PROGECT BECAUSE I CAN MAKE VERY GOOD

Remember to put your user name so we know who to add. Welcome to the project, Otterstar! See the FAQ for any questions. 21:34, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail ~ Silver Nomiantion
I am currently trying to find some quotes and fix some grammer mistakes. Besides those, comments? 07:42, June 27, 2011 (UTC)