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Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Pose is from a reference, I can show it if need be. 20:10 Wed Jan 2

Sun these are absolutely astounding! Could you add either a tag or bell to the collar? There’s usually one. :) 20:16, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

Soooo cute! Can you move the collar a little bit down the neck? It kinda looks like it's choking them right now.. ^^' Also, the forearm closest to us looks overly thick. 23:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

woah!! love everyhting on this charart, i cant wait to see the next one. Starclanwilldarkme2 (talk) 00:16, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing, Sun! Could you possibly make that <-- front leg a bit longer to match the length of the other? It seems a bit shorter. 03:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the lineart on the hind paws just a bit? 03:56, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

The front paw facing us feels a bit too chubby compared to the rest of the legs. Also, while I do understand what you're going for with the lil fatty fluff on the haunch to define the tummy, it looks a bit off. Plump cats don't really have their fat protruding past their haunch, and with them laying down like this, the fat would go lower to touch the ground bc of gravity. These are super cute ;; I adore the toe beans so so much!! —​​​​​

Could be my personal preferences, but could you make the long haired's fur less.. spiky and give it more variation?

Hi Sun! You don’t have a limit like other art and take the time you need, but I just wanted to confirm that you’re still working? :) 17:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I am! I'm just trying to enjoy my last week of break before the semester! I'll upload soon! 18:46 Tue Jan 8

I love it! If it dosent get aproved here, my wiki, Complete Warriors Wiki needs some. :) -Texaswild

No real rush, Sun, but this is just a bump in case you've gotten busy and forgotten about the blanks. (and also a reminder that they're still here in case anyone needs to comment) ​​​​

--> this eye should be moved slightly or expanded in size.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:28, January 16, 2019 (UTC)​

Reuploaded This semester is gonna be hell. 17:20 Mon Jan 21

What's going on with the lines here on the short-furred blank? Slightly confused, and I assume it's just an oversight? ​

On both, could you thicken the lineart on the bottomside of the... I guess it'd be the wrist(?) of the > front leg?

The collars need to be moved down, they look like they're chokingPotato&#61;) (talk) 20:51, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

Woah what the hell happened to that...I'll check my layers in a little while. No clue why it did that. 23:21 Mon Jan 21

Um <-- this front leg on the longhair is thicker than said leg on shorthair, and the --> this eye's lineart on the longhair is thinner than the lineart of the shorthair's eyePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:11, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Apprentice Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I'm absolutely proud :) All colours from the alt star. Comments? CloudymoonTheCat

You should be proud! Define the shading on the tail and paws? 18:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shading a little on the shoulder back and haunch, add some to the forelegs and hindlegs farthest from us and soften the stripes, maybe add a handful more if you're able. This is very good! SquidwardPlays 18:47, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the stripes some too? 18:51, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Screams bc I keep forgetting to mention things. Sharpen the gold on the shoulder and foreleg a little, and there's waste between the whiskers. SquidwardPlays 18:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Is it better? CloudymoonTheCat

<-- this hind leg needs more white, there's a lot on the warrior alt. Also friendly reminder to upload under File:Feathertail.apprentice.alt2.png. It was misspelled earlier (it's fixed now)Potato Flakin (talk) 23:15, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm and the stripe placement would end up matching the warrior, as would everything else to it, since the warrior's the first in the set. Would you mind adding some white/very pale gray hairs up into the earpink, to match the set? I also think there'd be more, but thinner, stripes on the tail. You're doing excellent with this, by the way

Could you define/add some more stripes on the front paw furthest from us and the back paw furthest from us? And add some cream to the hind paw furthest from us too. 03:25, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Nice image overall. I'll promote you into an apprentice.

Reups CloudymoonTheCat

Could you maybe blur the white a little bit on her right front paw? -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:42, 1/10/2019 ]

Sure, I'll do it when I'll come home :) CloudymoonTheCat

Reups :) CloudymoonTheCat

Could you define the shading overall, especially on the gray? 22:03, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I do think there'd need to be more visible pale parts on the belly and haunch, alt. warrior seems to have them, and that's first in set

Reups any better? CloudymoonTheCat

Also I'm not going to be able to work on it till tomorrow morning (UTC time) CloudymoonTheCat

The shading seems blotchy, for a lack of a better word. It seems to be darker in places and non-existent where it should be (for example the legs). It's also overblurred in places.

Reupsss CloudymoonTheCat

Can you darken the shading on the forelegs please. 13:00, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the inside hind leg. Your doing great! ^^

13:57, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded CloudymoonTheCat

Can you define the shading depth on all the legs? I think the stripes on the face need to be connected to the eyes too. Might be my eyes, but there appears to be leaky shading on the back. On the hind leg closest to us, maybe move the white so it's against the line art of the haunch? it looks a little off in the middle like it is. It also appears less soft on the warrior. You've done a great job on this so far!!

21:23, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

The base looks a bit too light, could you darken it a bit? Sharpen the white too.

01:03, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit to match the roughness the ones on the other images have, if you would

On the front paws, the white doesn't match the placement portrayed on the star, and it's leaking a bit. —​​​​

Reups --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 08:16, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the white a bit more? might be my eyes, but it looks like it hasn't changed at all.

16:44, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, any specific places it should be sharpened? --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 20:26, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

For reference. The red is where the white should be on the paw if you're following the star's pattern of having white underarms, blue is where the white is leaking, and green is where the white needs to be sharpened. —​​​​

Ok, thanks! --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 10:50, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups yep yep :) --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 12:35, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

We should hardly be able to see white on the shoulder looking at the other alts, and there's too much white on <- side of the haunch. you're getting there! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 14:57, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 16:12, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the hind paw furthest from us? 13:17, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do it when my brother will give me the computer --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 20:23, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded--<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 09:20, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:51, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the stripes should be sharpened, and the shading on the -> front leg should be defined. There should be shading on the face and remove some of the shading on all the paws so they don't look so gray.

Reups --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 11:48, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

The blob of white on the hindleg closest to us looks off and I believe still that the shoulder white should be lessened to just barely be visible upon looking at her other two TUG alts. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 17:30, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

I don't understand what you mean about the hind leg... Should I sharpen the white or remove it? --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 19:34, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 19:59, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the > back white paw, as well

Reups There you go --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 11:40, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define it again? It still looks very flat

Reups I accidently thought you meant the back paw farthest from us before... --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 16:25, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

The highlights are making the base color look way lighter than the alt star. The stripes also look like they've been run through a sharpen filter or something, making them look strangle pixelated. And the shading, especially on the back and head, is so dark the pattern and coloring is getting lost. Where's your light source coming from?

It's coming from the top right, though when I started this I wasn't sure what a light source is, so I might have to fix some of the shading :/ --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat  08:20, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups I hope it's not too dark now --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat  17:42, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Leader Blanks - For Approval
Uploading on my personal for now since its easier to work with. I plan on fluffing up the longhaired tail...which as I look at my cats the tails are slightly too long and I'll fix that next upload as well. <span style="">16:54 Sun Jan 20 2019

Cool! Can you shrink the ears by the smallest amount and make em more pointy? I love this BreezeyPotato&#61;) (talk) 17:46, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add whiskers? :) 18:14, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'd think Breezey would add the whiskers once everything else is all said and done, mainly because that seems like the least important thing, compared to making sure the anatomy and whatnot (read: floof) is correct. =P ​​​​​​​​

The shorthair's tail is a bit lumpy, could you make it more consistent in width? It's mostly where the tail curls Eggheart (talk) 22:07, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tails could be shortened a tad, it might be just me but they seem pretty long. 22:12, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

im gonna be the one who says it fluff those longhair tails up lul 22:19, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the lineart around the eyes more even? 22:20, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the lineart on the longhair's chest furPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:44, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Make the eyes a bit rounder. 03:12, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

Paws look big for the legs, and make the jaws evenPotato&#61;) (talk) 02:57, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Paws look fine to me Malina457 (talk) 17:43, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

The ears look a bit big for a “standard” kitty. Maybe shrink them a wee bit. Seems more like an oriental build when looking at those ears anatomy wise. ​​​​​​ <span style="">21:24, 01/23/2019

Please read comments before and my own before commenting. <span style="">2:07 Thu Jan 24 2019

I'm not 100% sure that was necessary, Breezey. There's a lot of comments on this and it's possible other comments hadn't been seen. ​​​​​​

Oop didnt see the ear comment before mine. But taking a second look, the faces (at least on the shorthair) cpuld be rounded out a tiny bit more ​​​​ <span style="">17:54, 01/24/2019

Forest Of Secrets Minor Rogue 3 - CBA
Second tabby and first rogue let's see how it goes <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:39, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could ylu possibly define your light source? I'm finding it a bit hard to see, it could just be the lighting on my phone if not. 10:21, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the light source fine. Could you define the shading depth a little on the paler part of the tail?

13:46, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

I kinda agree with Minkclaw, particularly on the legs. It's hard for be to distinguish the shading there, but it could just be the pale parts. 13:52, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Is this any better? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 17:52, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

I’m still having a bit of trouble seeing the shading on the pale part of the tail and the paws, could you darken it there?

Reups <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 23:32, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Uh, just fixed something that went wrong even though I could've sworn i made sure it was right :'( <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays  00:12, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hi formatted text. Desaturate the earpinkPotato&#61;) (talk) 00:48, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof, I love this! You've improved so much. Can you smudge these areas a bit more? It may be because of my screen's high contrast, but they're very stark compared to the rest of the image. —

Reups TY Echo :'o <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:52, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Tigerstar (TPB) (Alt. DF) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:07, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the white?

Can you taper the scars just a bit more? 13:12, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the paw pad color and it doesn't appear his mouth is filled inPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:45, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

The paw pad color looks fine to me, I can see it. 04:31, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:38, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the nosePotato&#61;) (talk) 00:28, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

...There's nothing to fill in. 00:36, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

The nose looks fine imo 00:51, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

I actually concur with Potato; there's a little 1x1x1 pixel where the nose is, and it appears white. 04:07, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the white belly could be smoothed a bit more imo, still sharpish

Could you possibly change the scars placement to match his regular DF ? --<span title="Spottedleaf shouldn&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' t die" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=Spottedleaf shouldn't die"&gt; Cloudymoon     Cats   <span style="" title="Just joking ;)">  Forever    19:09, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

I think scar placement on alts doesn't matter, unless that's falsePotato&#61;) (talk) 20:25, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I really don't think that's the nose, just part of his upper lip. I'm pretty sure scar placement doesn't need to match on an alt; there are other alts (IE Yellowfang) whose scars don't match the main images. I blurred the shading, however, I think what people are seeing as shading is actually a scar. 20:49, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Last I knew, scar placement didn't need to match... as long as the scars are there, I really don't see an issue with them not matching.

could you make the belly scar... blend more naturally in? it doesn't look like a scar

Lighten the shading on the white a bit? 14:09, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

I think all of the scars could use some blending/sharpening, imo. They look a bit more like pink stripes than scars to me. 14:11, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:26, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

can you smoothen out the white on the belly a little? <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 02:17, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (Alt Star) ~ CBA
<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    06:36, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth the shading and define the light on the legs? 06:51, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:05, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define the eye depth. —​​​

Reups --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:23, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

I know this is probably picky but shouldn't the eyes at least match the shade of her eyes in her star image? 07:24, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

It's not picky Mink, I'll fix it. --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:29, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reups i like it --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:31, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

I know fleck placement is artist's choice, but can you add some more to the <--- elbow? The lack of white flecks compared to the rest of the image is really off putting. 13:11, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps expand some of the shading on the flank up to the shoulder and smooth it a bit?

17:43, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Boyy she looks like a brown oreo --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:12, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Mind lightening the shading overall?

Reups Yepppp --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    09:15, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading where it meets her shoulder a bit.

15:27, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also define the shading depth? I don't see any gradience. 04:10, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

@Vec, could you describe it in a easier way? I dont understand. --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    04:41, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups--<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    04:44, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

What Vec meant was that you should add a darker, thinner layer of shading in places where there would be less light.

Reups idk --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    12:40, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Oreo kitty. Can you lessen the shading on the cheek a bit? —​

Reups yes oreo --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    05:12, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading - I know shading darkness is artist's choice, but it looks black. 10:55, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

The shading darkness is perfectly acceptable; I use darker shading than this on most of my images, and Rain's ToEH was even darker than what this is. ​

I have to agree that the shading looks too dark as compared to her pelt color. It’s kinda off-putting. 17:06, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

It doesn't seem off-putting at all. We've had countless images of this coloring approved with darker shading. I'm not sure why it needs to be lightened at all; darkness is artist's choice, and it's not distorting anything here, therefore isn't required to be lightened. ​

Uh... I agree it should be lightened... we shouldn't argue over a critique - Icy acknowledged its artist choice but still recommends it and me and Hawkey agree. Silverfur doesn't have to do anything, it's just suggestions. I don't understand why this is being argued, we ask people to lower the opacity of shading often.

That aside, the ear pink and nose pink blend in a bit too well. Can you define it more? —

As I stated I am aware it is artists choice which is why Silverfur can refuse my comment if they want to. However, I am asking them to lighten the shading or lower the opacity due to the fact that to me, it looks black. 22:20, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups I would say the shading looked a little dark, so i tried to make it lighter a bit. --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    08:16, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Poppyfrost (Alt Q) - For Approval
Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 02:37, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Earpink is two-toned in -> this ear, make it one color and define shading on legs and facePotato&#61;) (talk) 03:28, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the shading and define eye depth? 04:35, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

All ginger, whether it be in patch form or all over the pelt, should have stripes^^

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 18:27, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

could you give the stripes more variation and curve?

Smudge out the patches and the stripes a bit more. —

Spikefur (Star) ~ For Approval
whoo, finally finished this in like an hour lmao I got all colors from the apprentice, as well as the spike style. He looks like my grandpa lol 04:25, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Glad he has the cite now lol. Define facial shading Potato&#61;) (talk) 04:49, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, it's at 100 now. 05:24, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. Also, if you get asked to define the shading, you can always create extra layers of shading to define it.

Andd.. I'm going to ask to define the shading and add more depth to it. 12:39, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

BloodClan tabby rogue (Ro) - CBA
Almost made this silver-and-black when I realized we still have the default tabby rule, whoops. I love the rogue blanks.... ​

CBA? 13:35, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Warrior blanks ~ For Approval


19:15, January 27, 2019 (UTC) Love these! The head looks a bit off though. Sorry if you don't understand this but it's hard to explain: Try connecting the <-- line from the head to the body. Then make the <-- side of the muzzle curve upward a bit and the chin protrude from that line. Basically shapen the muzzle/face a little more. Here's a red line 19:33, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Obligatory redline from me. —​​​

The short-haired’s tail is very uneven and almost looks crooked. Please make the entire tail even and smooth. 20:00, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Longhair's back foot is a little chubby, and the noses should be expanded in size a tad *looks at cat for reference*Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:27, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. will update longhair shortly, can't now because my latop is about to die and i don't feel like walking to get the charger. 20:31, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

There are some random lines on the shorthair's head that don't make sense, and there's waste outside --> this ear on said blankPotato&#61;) (talk) 21:41, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you specify which lines? Not sure if you are heading about the whiskers over the eyes. It's a preference of mine but i can remove them if necessary. 22:13, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

The lines coming off the ears. I can send a perfect screenie if needed. Now on to homework lolPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:33, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Those are whiskers. —

(Apologies for double comment; just got on my pc LOL) Here's a redline for the face. I don't necessarily think the perspective would change the level of the eyes, and I think they should be leveled out to be on the same line. Also, the muzzle needs to be a bit more rounded ish? Something like this maybe. When sketching cat heads, this is always what I do so maybe that'll help level out the head. —

Minor, but could you add a line on the shorthair going down the chest to represent the little floof of hair on the center of their chest. 22:51, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. happier with the long hairs fur now. 00:23, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make them a bit bigger. 00:28, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Can you align the line for the right cheek down closer to the nose? —

Re-uploaded. noticed the back didn't match. 00:31, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. tweaking the longhair shortly. 00:53, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the short haired's linear art too thick?

Yeah the lineart should only be about 2 pixels thick i believe ​​​​ <span style="">01:34, 01/28/2019

I don't think there's a specific ruling for lineart thickness, but compared to the longhairs fluff it may look thicker. I personally think it's fine tho. —

Just me, but it looks like the shorthair is larger?? Malina457 (talk) 03:33, January 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

The shorthair is larger, I haven't updated the longhair's size yet. 04:25, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

The thickness should be consistent across the long haired and the short haired, at least. I still think the short haired linear art is too thick.

Re-uploaded. that was a nightmare... all the lineart or are there any particular spots that are too thick? 05:22, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. found a few spots i thought i had fixed on the shorthair. 05:31, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

dunno how to exacty word it but the muzzle looks too centered for the angle of the face. something's just a bit off about it. 09:16, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps shorten/erase the muzzle lines to make the style more consistent with the other blanks? Also, I think the linear art is too thick on the short haired, especially on the back.

I feel like adding a shoulder on each blank would be beneficial. The backs seem kind of flat without them. 14:13, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Here's a reference for the muzzle. I think it's fine to have them stylized like what Patch is going for. Our blanks have a wide variety of styles and the StarClan blanks had the same issue of "match the blank styles" and in the end that got overruled. I think they just need some anatomy fixes but the style is fine. —

Re-uploaded. 02:05, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (Q alt) ~ For Approval


19:38, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure how to explain but it appears Silverfur's pattern is slightly different than what you have right now, apologies because I cannot elaboratePotato&#61;) (talk) 20:29, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

I think it's because of the shading differences. Maybe lessen the shading a bit? —

Re-uploaded.

22:49, January 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the --> ear 06:18, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Was just giving a suggestion but do you need the file for pebbleshine's star? I could manage. --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    08:18, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

would you mind smoothing out the shading or lightening it?

Sure, you can send me the file Silver. My discord is on my userpage if you could send through there. 14:05, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

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14:27, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading? Vec, I love this Malina457 (talk) 16:20, January 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reups ^^ 23:55, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

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Define leg shading, light on leafs, and earpink in --> earPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:27, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

shrink the white on the legs, and there is the palle bit on the ears.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:09, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the earpink in --> this ear a littlePotato&#61;) (talk) 23:15, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the white on the legs does match the other images in placement; i've the file and also matches the alt kit not in use. also, there wouldn't be pale in the ears

Could you add some light to <--- ear? 23:33, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading on the face? it dosent match, and can you add some light on the right ront leg/paw?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:55, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

and there are only ment to be 4 tail stripes<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:04, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded per alt kit, there would be five on this side of the tail, which isn't the same as the alt app. tucked it a bit further down for consistency, but it'd be there.

okay, just when I was doing this, somone told me 4 stripes, on the back 2 legs, the white should be on the other side of the leg.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:56, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

The white's in the right spot; I have the files for the alt set. The master pattern has it just on the underside, which due to this blank, is just like the alt kit.

on the right leg, the white is on the top of the leg, think about it, and its positioning, think of if you were looking at it from the front. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 01:09, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Right, it goes all the way to the top. The < side of the shoulder is hidden on the apprentice blank, and thus can be white and match. It again, is the same case as the alt kit.

well, I cant change how you think, so I shouldnt waste my time trying. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 02:03, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

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I see the waste, I colorpicked from the icon. Other than waste, comments? Malina457 (talk) 22:41, January 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups for waste Malina457 (talk) 22:47, January 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

can you smoothen the shading? and the eyes look white.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:11, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

I think that's an eye style, Brook's to-be has the same eyes. Shading should just be smoothed out on the neck, belly, and tail.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:16, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes could have a touch more depth, perhaps, though I know you don't have that much space to work with

the shading on all of it, not bu much, just a little.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:52, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Man that was rough shading reups Malina457 (talk) 00:08, January 29, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Smooth the shading on the butt. 02:12, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

reups' Malina457 (talk) 03:05, January 29, 2019 (UTC)malina

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I alwaays thought Dawncloud was dark brown! so her not being the right color makes sence to me!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:38, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading, and the eye depth. 23:55, January 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, oof, dose the earpink look blue? is it just me?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:02, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

It's pretty gray, pinken it up a bit! Besides that, could you define the shading on the belly and tail? Eggheart (talk) 00:14, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, Ima re-do the stripes, I dont like them.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:38, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, stripes look better, still dont like them tho.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:50, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Define lightsource, earpink is two-toned in --> this ear, make it one color, and the shading should have some depthPotato&#61;) (talk) 01:00, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, now I like the stripes! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 01:05, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

It doesn't appear you changed anything, it's still the same image as beforePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:12, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, oof, that is what I think half the time, I made it more noticable.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 01:16, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink color confuses me, is it gray or pink, and the shading looks.. idk what to say, maybe flatPotato&#61;) (talk) 01:27, January 29, 2019 (UTC)]]

The ear pink looks fine imo. Some ear pinks on other chararts are grayish in color, and this color works fine with the pelt. Owlbite already did what you asked them to do, Potato. I do think the stripes are nice but could be tapered off at the ends a bit. 01:49, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I had a blue shading tint... oof... <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 01:55, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

This looks great. But on the front left paw is the darker spot supposed to be there? 02:46, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Right paw, I mean, closest to us. 02:46, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, no, it wasnt, I messed up on stripes... <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 02:54, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

It is still there. Would you like me to circle it? 03:08, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, if it is still there, than yes. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:13, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

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Would you mind defining the shading on the tail tip, and the depth of it on the paws?

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Yes I know the pattern is different, I had already finished this a couple days ago but didn't post it. I'll reupload when I get the chance.

Do you have to match owl's pattern or? (Not a big fan of her's but still) Malina457 (talk) 02:50, January 29, 2019 (UTC)malina

Malina, that is rude to say that you do not like her pattern. Star also said that she would be reuploading to match the pattern. 02:52, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

The have to match the first put up. 02:53, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Was just my tired opinion, I did apologize to them Malina457 (talk) 03:15, January 29, 2019 (UTC)malina