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Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) ~ For Approval
Hiya everyone :3 I'm back! (also when I was uploading I saw JC had a kit image already? Yet it wasn't posted on his page... So should I not do this or was his image declined when the other person made him?) Anyway, woo- black kitties 11:30, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

The image was never approved. Also, he needs texture.

Lighten nose pink ~ cute! -- 13:23, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Unless specified in the books, all black chararts must have black noses, as this is what the majority of black cats have. 15:23, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice job! I think I spy a white pixel next to the (our right's) ear. 15:47, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, Sorrel, I believe it's possible for black cats to have darker nose pink, but it might not necessarily be black. I remember asking Breezey about this, and I think that's what she said. But given that his other chararts have black noses, it's best to match that.

Reups Thanks everyone :3 I added the texture 21:01, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? .3. 20:42, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Mind defining the light on the tail? 22:24, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

It's been more than a week it was re-upped, so this has to be declined. Sorry. 22:06, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Um, actually. It's only been five days since breeze commented?? I'm not sure if that applies... 00:12, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think Foxy is right. I'm putting this back for approval unless someone else says otherwise. It isn't fair if someone asked for comments after seven days and it gets declined. 07:50, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Foxy here, it does seem unfair to decline it before a week has gone by. The last reupload date doesnt really count in this situation, since Vixen asked for more comments in the first place. If they dont reupload after a week (?), then i believe thats a long enough timespan to reupload before getting declined. I can see how that could get confusing though. 00:42, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for not re-upping I've been pretty sick all week and the wiki has slipped my mind. I will update later today. Sorry 12:34, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 04:47, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Icicle (Kit) ~ For Evaluation
Teenie Tiny Itty Bitty Kitty! ♥♥♥ -- 14:07, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very cute :3 darken the shading on the tail and paws ^^ (I also fixed the heading for ya) 14:10, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped~ better? -- 14:38, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, please. 15:21, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth too. And I'll get to that GIMP tutorial later today I promise. I just didn't get much time last night. .-. sorryz. 15:46, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I will do asap. Which might not be for a bit... -- 15:58, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

There is a white pixel on the back foot and there is waste everywhere. One the otherhand, beautiful job! 21:38, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

She's pale gray so lighten her up tons. 00:06, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped~ Made lighter, shading makes him look darker.-- 16:11, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste below his foot. The color of the cat is also overlapping the lineart on the legs, the lineart should be pure black. Everything should be below it. Define the shading, and lighten him up a little. 23:28 Wed Feb 25

I made the tutorial I'll get it to you hopefully tomorrow. And could you smooth out the shading a bit? 05:26, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head?--✫Silverpool on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 09:17, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink, it's looking purple. 12:36, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped --- Oh wow i changed him a lot... -- 16:41, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink is still hot pink. Waste is above ears and around the paws.... Can you put shading, everywhere? 23:13, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Andddd make Icicle more grey. He's turning a little white. nvm 23:15, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart. When you use a paintbrush before blurring, don’t just stop around the lineart, brush over it, so it spreads everywhere over the image.-- 00:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Uppied! Thanks for all the advice! -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 03:11, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading and remove the waste. Define the earpink as well, and the shading is still leaking away from the lineart. 03:19 Sun Mar 1

What do you mean by "The shading is leaking away from the lineart"? -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 14:35, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

You see how the shading is kinda not next to the linear art? That's called leaking. To fix it, just add a new layer then add shading on the part where the shading isn't touching the liner Art. ^^ 14:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Removed the waste~ -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 16:19, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Anything else?-- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 00:12, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks very blotchy. Try to darken it, then blur it. Add shading to the neck. 00:16, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

There's still waste, and the color of the cat is still overlapping the lineart. If you don't already, try to use layers. It makes making charart so much easier when you do. Darken, smooth out, and blur the shading, and define the earpink as well. 12:35 Tue Mar 3

Add shading to the tail. 00:14, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paws just a tad. Not to much, just a couple ticks on the opacity bar will do. 00:45, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

You still working? 05:04, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Running Horse (Ancient) ~ CBA
Whoo this was fun. 08:24, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you edit the lineart slightly to go with the wrinkles? I made him in mind to basically be like a Devon Rex without the super fancy fur and they are big wrinkle monsters with lots of rolls  10:13, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, too. Nice job^^ 13:08, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I tried 08:35, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the chest fur maybe? 14:51, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

No I think it needs to have more shading. 21:38, February 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. 21:50 Fri Feb 27

Re-upped Chest doesn't need shading, nor does it need lightening up. 06:32, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest, I really do not see any shading at all. I think you chose a very specific brown tint that just happens to be only a couple of shades darker than the rest of the brown(in the color family), and that equals: hidden shading. It blends in, so it pretty much looks like darker brown patches. So I am going to suggest you try tinting a darker brown. And actually I think the chest shading could be defined. 12:24, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped idk how you can't see the shading tbh it looked fine on my monitor. Also, I tinted it red, not brown. However, I lightened up the shading a bit and defined it, because it was looking really dark. 12:32, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the stomach and tail shading? Utsukushī! (Beautiful in Japanese) 23:21, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ew. 10:37, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Either it's my computer or phone or something, but I really can't see the shading on the haunch and tail. <-- side of the cat is fine, but everything on --> side, like what I mentioned, appears to be lighter. Could you please darken it a tiny bit?

??? I can see it fine on my iPad? I'll darken it, but hopefully I'd isn't have to darken it too much- it's on 90 opacity. 05:09, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I really would rather not to define it further. Since I can see it clearly and it's as dark as it can get tbh. 08:06, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 06:38, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (AT) - CBA
This. Very. Bad. 14:38, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

She has a pale chest, I believe. 15:15, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading and/or neck shading  23:18, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 00:13, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Thin the stripes, her stripes are not that thick I don't think.-- 00:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

This is facing a different side so I think it's fine tbh. 05:17, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think her stripes are more broken up; but as Burntclaw says it's facing the other side so... I'm not sure.S i  l  v  e  r  i  a   Always  Shine like the dark moon☽ 05:52, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I'd rather not touch the stripes, because I'm actually rather fond of them. 10:04, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah they look fine. And it would just cause unneeded stress to change them. Define the tongue shading a tad? This is beautiful. ^.^ and Bramble, something in your siggie is making our comments turn small. I tried to look for the source but I couldn't find it. So if someone could, I'd be grateful. 12:57, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reups yep, I'm not changing them. Thank you sweetie Also, the problem was a font-size 2 thingy after the sig ended, and I've gotten rid of it. 16:37, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading just a tad. This is beautiful, Sorrel. =) 21:17, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

She's getting gorgeous. I can't really think there's still any unlisted problems :) 10:31, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think the face shading is fine, personally. 17:47, March 4, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes on her sharpclaw are a bit more rounded. I get that it's a different side, but it's still required to match in terms of style.

Reups Okie - I completely redid the stripes on the main body. 16:55, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Chasing Clouds (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Tetszenek ezek az ősi nevek^^ 20:16, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and maybe smudge the gray a tad.-- 21:22, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Changes:http://www.ezimba.com/work/150304C/ezimba12232556242400.png 19:55, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadng more, he looks nice^^ 14:33, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Köszi ^^ 18:38, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Flamepelt (Alt E) - For Approval
I got so much inspiration from Sandstorm's elder for this, and I got the colors from her alt apprentice, actually. If she gets an orange alt, then so does Flamepelt. I am insanely proud of this.

Burnt literally killed me for announcing it cause she wanted it :S could you define the shading on the legs 02:36, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. lmao oops. Burnt already has Running Horse anyways- there's no need to jump the gun on images.

Hey who said I wanted it >:O You see where the transfer from the haunch and the tail? Mind adding some shading there? It seems a bit flat. I'm quite sure some light will be blocked there. I'm so bad at explaining sorry about that X.X 02:51, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There was shading there, actually. It was just flat. I'm also not gonna change the source itself, since as I said above, I basically used Sandstorm's elder as a reference.

lel my shit elder image. anyway can u maybe smudge the facial stripes a teeny bit. 11:06, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Lol, try to keep it a bit more PG..um to be completely honest, I'm having a bit of a hard time seeing the shading. The image isn't flat, so I know there is shading, it's just not too prominent if ya know what I'm saying. So maybe define it a bit more in that way? This is pretty, nice job^^ 14:26, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 'shit' is PG and perfectly acceptable in my book, considering he's talking about his own image and no one else's. Also, I defined the shading, but not that much. I can see it perfectly fine on my own screen. So basically it got defined in certain parts, but not everywhere.

it's fine with me too, but I say if it's bleeped on tv it probably shouldn't be said on a PG wiki page. Just saying :/ it doesn't matter to me though, I'm just thinking of those who feel uncomfortable seeing those kinds of words. 16:58, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

could you lighten the shading actually? it looks kinda dark 23:50 Fri Mar 6

I actually think the darkness is fine- if I lighten it, I can promise that Darkfrost or another user will probably tell me to darken it again. =P

I quite like the shading as it is now, tbh. Mind defining the earpink a tad? damn how do you make such gorgeous tabbies 02:53, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have no idea tbh I looked at an image I liked the style of and went with it.

lol I never said darken it, just make it more visible. It was your choice on how to do so. could you define the shading on the ears a tad? 19:01, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Well, I'm not unblurring the shading, so I don't know how else you'd expect me to define the shading? Unblurring that would make it a mess. Also, there is no shading on these ears- I'm using the source that Sandstorm's elder has, and I don't see any shading on that image, so I'm not adding it here.

I can see it fine as it is now tbh. 05:35, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a tad, please. 17:24, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

poking in to say that the only shading on the ears would be on the front of them considering its the same source from the elder. 17:42, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Mistlekit (TPB) (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
lel 13:16, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

很漂亮，^_^ 干得好. define the light on the tail and legs? 13:20, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

tail looks fine to me but legs could use some light 23:49 Fri Mar 6

Define the earpink in the ---> ear. Damn david, this is gorgeous. 00:28, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Cute, I love kits. Smooth out the chest shading? ignore me if it's not even shading... 07:26, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. lbr this isnt even that good it was a 15 minute job 12:42, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Meh black kitteh. Comments? 14:19, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 18:18, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it just fine tbh. 05:03, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Agreeing with the first comment. It should be defined, or at least more visible. 17:52, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
the third alt. i know i forgot the torn ear, i'll add that and lighten the shading in the next upload 23:33 Fri Mar 6

Define the scar. 02:55, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, also it's leaking on the haunch. 14:16, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

i dont think the shading needs to be blurred more but i will fix it leaking 15:20 Sat Mar 7

reups 15:30 Sat Mar 7

Actually i agree with Burnt, honestly. Just a little bit though. Define the shading on the ---> foreleg, also. 18:15, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

reups 15:39 Sun Mar 8

There is waste by our right forepaw, and blur the tail tip shading please. Otherwise I think this looks good. 00:24, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Mist (KP) Kittypet ~ For Approval
Welp. I tried... 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged the collor. 02:49, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg, and blur/smudge the transitions between the colors on the collar if you can. It still looks a bit hard-edged. 02:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged it more and did some stuff :P 03:10, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

The color needs to match his other images, so it has to be lighter. 14:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Add some more light on the tail and add some shading to the collar. 21:45 Sat Mar 7

Tiger, Mist has no other Kittypet images. So I don't know the original collar colour. 21:34, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, I mean the body color, not the collar. It needs to match the loner and kit images, so it needs to be a lighter shade of gray. I suggest to colorpick it. 21:44, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I'll brighten up the collar later. Couldn't change collar colour because I don't know what it originally was :/. (I'll clear the waste in the next upload) 22:05, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 2nd try... 22:17, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Since apparently I needed to move the files, this has now been renamed to Mist (KP).kittypet.png.

Lighten him up more, hes still quite dark as he is now. 01:02, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Let's bring her back with a redone pattern 11:47, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 22:44, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did other stuff too 06:40, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 11:00, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:35, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. Q) - For Approval
phew... it's been a long time since I've done this... She was described with having white patches in Dovewing's Silence. We've done alts for a change in stripe color, so I see no reason not to do one for a change in patch color. Comments? 02:35, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

I don't really think so. It doesn't describe her having different colours... 02:40, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Well, white patches implies a ginger base, and ginger patches implies a white base. I think it's a zebra-style moment, but Darkstripe got the same treatment.

I think it counts, since she was clearly described with ginger patches, not white. Anyway, define the shading everywhere. 02:49, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:04, March 9, 2015 (UTC)