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Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky Molto bene 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out and blur the chest, paws, and tail tip feathering; it looked a bit choppy 23:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste, Trolly. ^^; Also, blur the ear pink. 03:05, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add the slightest tad more opacity to the shading. *thought Cloudy was Sky e3e* 08:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yea, blur the shading, too. Forgot to mention that up ^^^there. Dazzle did what now? =P  09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge that hard edged bit off to the right on the white on the tail? How did you mistake her for my awesomeness? xD Sky Molto bene 12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 09:00, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on it. It will be up later. 11:09, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded This would have been up earlier today, but I woke up and 3:30 AM and I haven't gone to sleep since >_>. (It's 4:42 PM now, so.. xD.) 20:42, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the white? 01:47, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I'll blur it a bit, since if I blur it too much it will look really bad, and if I don't blur it, people will say I need to. (Waiting for a few more comments before editing.) 10:46, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head a bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  00:27, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Not just the head shading...blur the rest of it too. 04:50, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the white by the whiskers a tad, just a little. 14:09, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Silver. According to the guidelines, you have two weeks to get a redone image done. It's been well over that, so I must decline this. 04:43, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over, if that is okay. 20:11, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Just make sure to reserve it. =) 20:12, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank ya Cloudy. ;3 I don't know why, but these ones are a pain in the neck to make in my opinion... =_=  20:29, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink and blur the shading. Also, I love bi-colored cats. These styles are my favorites. xD 20:30, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (D) - Tweaked
There are so many changes to this file, it's hard to keep track.. But the first OA was Sandy, with the most recent redo by Iceheart. He needed a floofy tail. 17:51, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the tail pweeze. Maybe make it a bit pineconey, kinda like Squirrelflight's? 23:55, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Or, if you want him to have a bottlebrush tail, go nuts with it. Yeah, that's a ferret's tail, but it's the first pic I found of a nutso bottlebrush tail. 00:14, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more 'floof' to the bottom where it's straight, kinda like the warrior? 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dat floof >:C 20:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the tail lineart some more. 21:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

See my comment on the warrior. I can't; there simply aren't enough pixels to fit all that 21:43, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's two black pixels inside the tail. 18:55, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, technically there's three black pixels, but same thing xD Can you possibly just add one more layer of pixels to the fluffy tail? (sorry if you can't, but it just looks so thin...) 14:05, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (W) - Tweaked
Fluffff <3 OA was Insane with a redo by Iceheart. 18:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the bushy-ness more even at the top of the tail, it kind of dips. 21:59, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

And make the lines on the tail thicker. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't make the lines on the tail thicker or it won't look the same. Trust me. The same applies for the deputy. 20:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it a bit.... crazier to match the deputy? XD And there's like two random black pixels inside the tail near the base. 07:24, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
The patches were over-blurred in some places and shading was some-what blotchy. OA's were Sandstar, Bloo, and Leaf-storm. 19:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, you're fine. 8D Just lighten and blur the earpink. 21:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  22:23, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:24, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I dont think the changes are showing... 22:33, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest a tad. :3 23:00, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Move the highlight of the eye to match the light source and maybe make the tail tip a bit wavier? It looks kinda funny since it's just straight, but that's just my opinion. 23:59, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable/define it. 01:14, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the shading/highlight/lighter spot on his shoulder --  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the gray into the white? He's long-furred, so I think it oughta look furry. :3 03:11, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since smudging is optional and other images would have to be tweaked it if was smudged, I think it should stay as is. Could you whiten the white a little though? 06:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink, and make it more triangular. it's awfully hard to see.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:12, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 23:25, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? And, make the white more white and less gray :3 09:25, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can fix the ear pink, but the white is as white as I can possibly get it. :/ I'll be reuploading sometime tomorrow or Saturday. 23:14, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Still gotta blur that shading a bit. =P 04:48, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3  15:43, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you tone down the eyes? They look kinda neon. 17:19, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Redid the shading to help the white look more white~ 23:24, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the haunch shading. 05:37 Sun Mar 18

Reuploaded 06:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Sky Exterminate! 09:58, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Chhanges not showing 15:52, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the body just a tad. 17:20, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~

There's a leetle bit of waste above his right ear. Kill it with fire? 00:08, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Shredtail (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine with a tweak by me. The fur on the tail look all choppy, the scars looked paint brushed on, and he was a modified triangle tabby. I hate to have to redo one of Night Shine's fantastic chararts, but for the sake of realism... Comments? 23:37, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

P.S. I forgot to add ragged fur, I'll do that when I reupload. 23:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't the tail tip be rounded a bit? To quote myself on chat: "Holy sh**." 23:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Haha luff ya, Cloudy! :) 23:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the naked part of his tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 02:40, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The scars on his tail look off. They go onto parts of his tail that would be fur, not skin. To fix this, either add bare patches where you know the tail would be, or remove the scars in their entirety. Also, can you take the smudge tool and make the scars taper in a more natural fashion? 02:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

You don't have to, but I think that you could add a furry tone to the stripes :3 *steals* 08:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is awesome. =3 *steals* 18:45, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (E) - Tweaked
I just tweaked the muzzle....OA was Thistle (who had help from 'teldy.) Comments? 01:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The line should end at the edge of her mouth and should not extend below it. 01:49, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Like this? 20:58, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shorten the mouth to end at the crease like it does on the apprentice charart. 20:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Pinefur (W) - Redone
Totally forgot to check if the nomination was approved.... XD I had so much fun with this it's ridiculous. <3 Anyways, stripes were unrealistic, and in my opinion shading was eh, but others might have disagreed. I'm so glad I can finally redo this. XD OA was Sandstar with a redo by me. Comments? 15:56, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading? Wonderful, Paleh! 21:13, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. *Steals kitty and pats* Sky Exterminate! 00:13, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, too. Me luffs this. 04:47, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (TB) ~ Tweaked
He needed patches, OA is Sandstar12 with redo by Iceheart22. I just tweaked the pelt and made the patches off of this, to be realistic, I'll change it if someone wants me to. 19:32, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and there's waste near the forehead. 19:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:45, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the highlights a bit? 21:09, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the patches. 21:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Um It doesn't have highlights... Which part of the patches? The part with the stripes or the outside part? I can't blur the stripes anymore or it'll look messed up. 23:51, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 23:58, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 08:07, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:31, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Fawnstep (MC) ~ Redone
Fail on tabby cx Well, she had to be redone because she had unrealistic stripes & the white was blotchy. OA was Hiddensun with tweaks by Rainwhisper and Bloo. 22:12, March 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * steals* This is purty. =3 Just define the eye and herb depth, and thin out the stripes at the tips. 22:19, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Sky Exterminate! 00:38, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on the chest a bit. <3 02:08, 17, 03, 2012

I think you should shrink the white on the chest, it looks too big... 02:15, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pfff Stoney this is my first try at a mackerel tabby... Dx Defined eye and herb depth, and kind of thinned out the stripes. I also defined the tail shading and blurred the chest just a tad. And Leafstrike, I think the chest is fine. 04:29, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I still think it's too big... :/. 19:21, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Leafstrike. It looks a little too large. Breeze whisker  23:23, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, this would be white shoulders, not white chest. Can you enlarge and blur the earpink? 01:49, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Weird, since I tried to copy it off like Leafpools... o3o Ah well, fixed! Changes might now be showing, though. 21:54, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, forgot to do what Paleh said xP  22:34, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (A) - Redone
Not sure how I feel about this one..... Anyways, redone cause it didn't look like tortie patches. OA was Sandstar then the wonderful Leggy. Comments? 22:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

8DDD Lovely!~ Can you just smudge the pelt into the earpink? 22:39, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

I am jealous of you Paleh x3. Smudge that little white pixel on her tail. 23:49, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

The Wonderful Leggy? I like that title. 8D Anyway, can you darken or desaturate the nose, so it isn't so neon? 23:57, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Ish so purdy *u* Define the earpink. 19:31 Sat Mar 17

Gorgeous. Maybe define the tail shading a little? Breeze whisker  23:24, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked


This is my first tweak, so just tell me if I'm doing something wrong.

So okayyy. I tweaked the shading and tried to make it more like her apprentice.

Comments? :3

15:35, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks almost like it is tinted brown... (sorry if its just my computer) Can you fix that? 15:46, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle you dork this is over the limit X3 16:01 Sat Mar 17

Yup, it is. xD Silly Thistle. Declined for now, you can repost when there's space. 18:52, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I archived something so you're good. 19:30 Sat Mar 17

The shading looks kind of green. When I did her apprentice, I tinted her shading slightly red, so that might help :) 23:16, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Upload it over the old file. 15:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded it over the old file, but it red tinged, and not a dork anymore. Phew. 18:25, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

In Cherrypaw's talk page, although it hasn't been put in due to lack of page numbers, I velieve ger eyes were revealed to be amber? Should the eyes be changed, or wait until a cite is in? Sky Exterminate! 01:53, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I say wait until a cite is added. If you don't mind...could you define the ear pink? 04:38, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

The light parts look tinted yellow-green. 08:33, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (D) ~ Redone
OA was Echomist, and reason for redo was because the shading and lighting was very blotchy. File changes might not be showing yet. Also, Cloudy sent me the apprentice's .xcf file, so I got the colors exactly from that, and I'm not changing them. Comments? 23:02, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it smaller. 23:07, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but to be honest the earpink on the apprentice is really neon, could you fix that on here then we can just do a minor tweak on the apprentice? Having a minor tweak is better than having 5 chararts having neon earpink. 01:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

That's fine. Tweak the ear pink... I'll fix it on the apprentice and re-upload it or something. 06:57, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to that. =) 07:17, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel of waste between the 3rd and 4th tuft of fur on the chest. 17:26, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Amberclaw (W) - Redone
Well, this is a strange looking classic tabby... Original artist was Honeyfur, with a redo by Riverpelt, a tweak by Mintstar, and a redo by Atelda. Comments? 23:25, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:28, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the paler parts? Breeze whisker  23:29, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I never knew there was an Amberclaw xD, blur the stripes a tiny bit. 00:55, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him a tad more ginger-y? Right now he looks light-brown. It's looking good!

Reuploaded 04:36, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

How can you call this a strange classic tabby? It's epic! xD Just define the earpink a tad. 08:00, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. I like this! ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  13:19, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:31, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading a bit more and brighten the highlights~ I love the pattern~<3 22:06, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (A) - Redone
OA was Mistypebble with the new blanks. She needed to look more like her warrior image, and all colors were taken from her warrior image. I got to try a few new texture techniques with this :3 Any comments for improvement? 00:05, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. 18:02, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (A) ~ Redone
OA was me, then redone with the new blanks by me, and is now being redone again by me. XD Needed to match the leader.~ File changes may not be showing yet. Comments for improvement? 16:29, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Also, when I had the image up for approval the first time, it was decided that she didn't need patchy fur, assuming that she was too young to have such fur. 16:59, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

So purdy. *u* Know this might be weird, but the tail doesn't seem to match the other images in my opinion.. Could you fix that? Dx  21:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Silverhawk (W) ~ Redone
Woot~ OA was Mintstarr, shading and highlights were flat, needed more ragged fur and it's was a triangular tabby. So yeaah... Comments?c: 16:43, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is so good *u* enlarge teh earpink. 16:51 Sun Mar 18

The shading looks somewhat flat. Can you give the shading some sort of depth? 16:57, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 17:25, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

The way the stripes blend in with th pelt doesn't look natural. Do you think you could smudge them slightly in the direction of the pelt? On the much thinner stripes, you don't even have to. This looks nice :D  21:08, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (A) - Tweaked
OA was Breezewhisker with the news blanks and she needed darker shading. Comments? 17:12, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 17:51, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (A) ~ Redone
OA was Rowan. Check the tweak pages as to why it was redone, 'cause I'm too tired to explain. 23:40, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading ^o^ 22:23, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think the shading's fine, Fallow. 22:40, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) ~ Redone
I planned on just tweaking this, but I thought she looked more light brown instead of dark cream so I redid her instead. I can go back and actually tweak the image if that would be better. I didn't think it had to be nominated again. Also, would being a cream cat qualify her as a tabby since it is a form of ginger? Breeze whisker  03:55, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the earpink. Maybe you could put in some faint stripes? Sky Exterminate! 04:33, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. That's a bit of a question... you see, all cats are tabbies. All of them, even if you can only see a few stripes on the forehead and tail in the right light. However, it's cats with the red gene that tend to show stripes more easily than, say, a black or white cat would (actually, not all ginger cats are tabbies, just fyi. Just most). However, in a red so dilute as to be any kind of cream, which is red mixed with brown, it's iffy as to whether or not she's have stripes. I'd say it's up to you, but since she's never been described with stripes I'd leave them out, personally.

And that is what Shelly does at quarter to 1 AM when she's online. 04:45, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

In short, Shelly does not want to add stripes to Daisy. Shelly does not even want to touch Daisy again. But if one cream cat is given stripes, suddenly there will be a movement among bored members of PCA trying to lobby to give all cream cats stripes, and Shelly will be forced to touch the Daisy again. And please don't make that happen. 05:00, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

We've had this discussion before, actually...but, I think it was said that would be going too far. Also, StarClan forbid Shelly need to touch Daisy again...that would be...really bad. 05:06, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think it could be an optional thing, but then again, it might lead onto "You should add stripes" and blah blah blah. Sky Exterminate! 09:53, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Willowshine (MCA) ~ Tweaked
Tiny tweak. Made her dark grey to match her description. 18:06, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was OwlGlitter. Comments? 22:50 Mon Mar 19

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked the whiskers to be longer. I can't tweak the left whiskers because there is no more room on the image to. Comments? 22:51, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Just make the canvas bigger 23:24, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean? Aren't the whiskers at the last pixel on the image? 23:27, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (L) ~ Tweaked
Paleh and I did a join.me and she told me all the patches I should remove and I'd rather not remove anymore. OA was Shimmerpool I think I can't remember. Comments? 22:53 Mon Mar 19

Could you please get rid of the facial patches? Look here. No black and white cate has extra white patches around the face in the black fur unless they have scar fur there. 23:14, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:19 Mon Mar 19

Nightstar (W) ~ Redone
Paleh gave me permission to redo him. Blurred lineart, out of whack shading and highlights...and he wasn't black. Paleh's gonna tweak the leader to match. 23:43, March 19, 2012 (UTC)