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Strong Pounce (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay let's try this again shall we? —  Minkclaw   13:28, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg farthest from us? Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, May 4, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Re-Ups —  Minkclaw   19:17, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little, and expand the light on the chest. 20:44, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste on the right side of the image and by the paws. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light to < front leg 14:32, 5/06/2017

Define the tail shading 14:39, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any earpink?

Still working? 22:53, 5/08/2017

Yes, it hasn't been a week yet. Yes there is ear shading, usually a cat's ear shading with be close to that of the base pelt or the color of their ears. I'll have it uploaded tomorrow. —  Minkclaw   19:52, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Mink, we ask if you're still working after 4 days, and no one asked if there was any ear shading??? 23:45, 5/09/2017

Winter I think they meant ear pink, not ear shading. 01:04, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I did my apologies and I was aware it was a week, that's what I was always told? —  Minkclaw   13:09, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Its declined after a week, but we ask after 4 days.. 13:23, 5/10/2017

Ah well my apologies then. —  Minkclaw   16:22, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   19:08, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink, I'm having trouble seeing it. Branchwing (talk) 21:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, define the light on the < leg. This needs to have dark brown ears, as as far as I can see, it's just earpink that's leaking around the ear. Get rid of some shading on the chest and add some shading along the base of the neck/chin, and define the eye depth 01:28, 5/12/2017

Also maybe smoothen out the ear pink too 01:34, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste along <- side, the back paw's lineart isn't black, eyes should be more yellow

I think the eyes are fine, their pretty yellow as is. And considering there's no other image to match I can keep them the color they are. I can see the ear pink just fibe can I get a second on that? —  Minkclaw   19:52, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's going to be dark brown ears, so the ear pink is going too blend into that and be invisible, since it's a little too dark. And it couldn't hurt to make the eyes more yellow, it looks like it's more on the brown side, honestly. 20:02, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Of course you see the earpink fine because it's your image :/ I do agree it's going to turn invisible soon, so maybe try lightening it or changing the color? It doesn't have to be super dark to look good 04:27, 5/15/2017

I can't distinguish the dark brown ears from the ear pink at all. It just looks like a giant blotch of color. I also agree about the eyes as well; they could stand to be shifted at least a bit.

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:14, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. 21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink 01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray 16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Theres waste by the butt 13:45, 5/09/2017

Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--  22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one

Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall 23:50, 5/09/2017

Reups --  20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images.

Reups --  02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place 02:43, 5/11/2017

Is there chest shading? If not, add some. 02:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define flank shading? Nice. :3 03:22, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  04:02, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The placement of the gray doesn't match completely. Especially check the warrior image, as you can see the difference between the shades better there, and also how there's a more defined patch of gray on the face.

Define the shading more <span style="">01:29, 5/12/2017

Reups --  02:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Ok I think the gray should match the elder's image since it was lightened/tweaked before the others and if that's the case then this is too dark, also the gray looks softer than the other images, and it's still kinda hard to tell what's gray and what's shading on the chest and front legs

Well, I was just asked to match the warrior image so I'm not sure what to do when critiques contradict each other :/ --  16:05, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The critiques, at least the recent one where I said to match the warrior image, don't contradict. I was talking about the gray placement, such as on the muzzle (which from what I can see, still hasn't been done). Snow is talking about the coloring, which is a separate issue, and also the coloring in other spots not previously mentioned.

There's a stray white pixel on the <--- paw. 21:08, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more <span style="">21:31, 5/15/2017

The shading on --> side of the head looks a little dark, maybe lighten and smooth it a little? 13:15, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like defining isn't the right word for this, but expanding is. I've noticed that the artist repeatedly "defined" the shading on the same spots when they should've expand it instead. That's why the shading looks pretty dark and not visible in some areas. It should be expanded on the tail and stomach.

Leafstar (Alt W.) ~ For Approval
how does one charart 21:12, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the texture a lit'l, and soften the white?

I think the shading is leaking by the belly on the curve of the hind leg <span style="">16:04, 5/07/2017

reuploaded the homework is threatening to drown me why did i leave it until now 23:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white patches? 23:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:23, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to brighten the patches more (try removing the brown on it), and give them a good blur/smudge, they look a little chalky.

Um, I don't think you can really brighten white guys? But maybe smooth the shading and lighten it just a smidge? Maybe that's why everyone's saying to lighten 'em^ <span style="">02:34, 5/09/2017

Yeah it is possible, Broken. I usually duplicate the layer the white is on and adjust the opacity until I get the desired brightness. I'm sure there are other ways, but that's how I normally do it. 03:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Or the dodge tool. :) Is it just me or is the muzzle darker than the rest of the image? Is that shading? 03:59, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the tabby pattern? I think she's meant to have tabby stripes anyway 21:36, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded defined + blurred white patches, got rid of the darker muzzle, and redid the tabby pattern with a thicker brush 21:55, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs and the tail, and define the light on the legs after you define the shading. The shading is also leaking on the < ear, and possibly remove the shading on the front of the chest, as that wouldn't be there in your source. The shading is also leaking along the back of the neck and the back itself, smooth the patch of white on the base of the tail and brighten the white more, it's looking like a milky-cream/white <span style="">23:52, 5/09/2017

Give the stripes more variation and make them curve around the body rather than just flat lines.

reuploaded 00:51, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a little bit, or at least add some depth. 01:56, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I think you missed a patch of shading on the bum by the base of the tail <span style="">02:44, 5/11/2017

Smooth <- ear shading and tail shading, also define light on the two legs closest to us and on the shoulder, aaand I think there's a few pixels of waste above the -> ear and by the nose

I don't know really how these pages work, but I think the white patches could be little creamier. I'm sorry I don't know how to sign this.

Crestpaw, they're supposed to be white. Also, sign posts by typing four ~ 03:18, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's a dark line on the spot where the muzzle meets the neck. Mind smoothing it out? 21:11, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:17, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading <span style="">13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more <span style="">18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please <span style="">01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs <span style="">21:32, 5/15/2017

Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">00:56, 5/17/2017

Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

What means tad? – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

tad means a little bit.

Pricklekit (WC) (Ki) - For Approval
My first image posted here... Hope you like it! Branchwing (talk) 22:23, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, define the shading depth, this needs a black tipped nose, define the light on the ---> front leg. Nice! 22:28, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think the black-tipped nose would be visible on this blank, as assuming that it's on the bridge of the nose is an assumption, and we don't make those here. <span style="">22:52, 5/10/2017

no it's not? dew nose has the exact same thing except with white. 23:33, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added the black tipped nose, considering the comment about Dew Nose. Also made her nose a little lighter to differentiate the tipped nose and the actual nose a little bit better, they would have been nearly the same color if I didn't. Hopefully I defined the shading enough. Branchwing (talk) 00:41, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! :) Smooth out shading depth a tad? 00:48, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the shading just a little bit? <span style="">04:52, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 21:37, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading again 01:28, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading itself is rather okay, but feel free to do so anyway. Define shading depth as well? <span style="">01:36, 5/12/2017

I feel like I could be defined just a wee bit on the legs(the shading) <span style="">06:09, 5/12/2017

Reuploaded Also changed the main color slightly, if you don't mind. I still have the hex code for the original color if you want me to change it back. Branchwing (talk) 14:38, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Make eyes look more yellow?

Reuploaded I just changed the hue a little bit, but I can repick the colors if you all think that's too close to gold or amber. Branchwing (talk) 12:28, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the legs and tail shading and smooth the ear pink 01:06, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have trouble defining things don't I. Especially the tail. But I think I'm doing the right thing. Branchwing (talk) 01:33, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

I think you know what you're doing, so I'll promote you to an apprentice. Smooth the shading some more <span style="">21:34, 5/15/2017

Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 23:41, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth on the legs and on the back paw. 23:42, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Slash (L) ~ CBA
...woW <span style="">01:18, 5/12/2017

There's strange patch of darkness above the --> back leg... was that intentional? It looks darker than most of the rest of the shading. Branchwing (talk) 14:52, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yes its shading depth <span style="">02:12, 5/13/2017

It looks out of place compared to the rest of the shading, though. Could you smooth it out a bit?

Define the shading depth on the tail? This must have been difficult to pull off^ It's very pretty! <span style="">23:29, 5/13/2017

Smooth the markings n paler parts out a tad to better match the other images 23:33, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head. ErmineGlow (talk) 23:44, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Also, define the shading depth on the flank and > front leg 23:46, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The higher scar on <- front leg should be closer to the white stripe below it and I think the three scratches on the back leg should look like this http://vvcap.com/w09l8ZisTwf and should be a bit longer

Reuploaded Smoothed everything including little patch of shading above > back leg, defined depth on tail, the head shading didn't really need defining but i put some more shading depth there, and the flank is the part above the leg, danny, and that's pretty defined as is, considering branchwing's comment. and the front leg doesnt need any shading depth in my light source but i gave it a tiny bit. And fixed scars. it doesnt have to match 100% you know @snow (about the length), and besides his leg is curled up, theyre gonna be scrunched together <span style="">22:40, 5/14/2017

CBA?

Loki (Ro) ~ CBA
I dunno if the shading's too dark, because my monitor won't let me see it properly.

You need the hex codes for the fur, eyes or earpink at all? <span style="">01:28, 5/12/2017

Minor, but the nose should be a very dark red. 01:29, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Here's the hex code for the nose: 0d0504 Here's for the earpink:ab4538 And here's for the eyes: 9cff00 (shading tint is optional but here: 6f4dff) <span style="">01:34, 5/12/2017

Smooth the earpink a little more, shading is leaking on the belly by the back leg's bend, and define the shading on the front leg farthest from us <span style="">01:41, 5/12/2017

re-up @Broken I have the exact same hex code? The tint is probably throwing the pink off. Also define what you mean by leaking @Snow.

Leaking shading means exactly what it sounds like? It's leaking away from the lineart on the --> back leg's bend?? Unless you changed it already <span style="">07:20, 5/12/2017

Leaking shading means the shading doesnt go all the way where its supposed to. Also no broken its not by the back legs bend if you wouldve looked at my comment :/ i said on the belly by the back legs bend <span style="">12:27, 5/12/2017

Funny, front leg farthest from us is covered in shading, and I don't see the shading leaking on the belly near the back leg? Unless I'm just stupid?

Wait, I just checked the current projects list. It says Streamdapple had reserved this on the 2nd, while you reserved it recently... am I missing something, or isn't it theirs? 03:01, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

It was declined (and archived) due to lack of work, and an image is someone's until it's archived, so...does that answer your question? (unless I'm just answering this wrong)


 * Yes that does answer it. Thank you, and sorry. :) 05:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

you're welcome Winter. :)

Smooth shading on head a bit and shading is leaking a bit on both front legs

re-up yeah I forgot to put it because I'm out of order because I'm kinda sick. :(

Maybe smooth the shading on the main body and shoulder a bit? 20:49, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a more gray color than what it is now? It looks a little too neon to match the other image. The earpink you want to match is on > ear of the kittypet, and right now it looks too purple <span style="">21:37, 5/15/2017

Winter, Broken gave star the exact hex code, so it's probably the tint on the kittypet that makes it look odd 22:08, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Yeah, the tint's throwing the earpink off. Also, Broken's image was fine with it, so *shrugs*.

CBA? <span style="">00:57, 5/17/2017

Spider Paw (W) - For Approval
I didn't add the extra toe because on the Early Settler, it's on the side that's not showing, but I can add it. 01:48, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smoothed out shading. 01:53, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Smooth the shading just a tad more and define the light a little. 01:57, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you try to add it in? Just a little bump on his other foot would be ok <span style="">01:59, 5/12/2017

I was just about to comment to smooth the shading, but Snek already said that I feel like the light could be defined on the back paw <span style="">02:02, 5/12/2017

Well broken little did you know I also said to define the light already 02:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow. :p 02:27, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Gonna be of the unpopular opinion here, but I really don't think you'd need to show that extra toe at all. This blank doesn't show that side of the cat, and the lineart looks a little awkward and forced with how it is. The paw would have to be kinda twisted in order for it to show that toe anyways given how this blank is shown.

Reuploaded 02:33, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the ear on <--- side? Congratulations on 2 approved images :) <span style="">02:44, 5/12/2017

Reuploaded Thank you, Broken! :) 02:58, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the top of the head and the ear that is farthest away from us? 04:09 12 May 2017

Shading's leaking on the belly.

On the back leg closest to us, it looks like there's a spot of shading that should be smoothed. 14:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:33, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

I think the overall shading could be smoothed a little, but also particularly on the ears. In addition, I think the shading's leaking a bit on the haunch. 23:04, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:25, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading's still leaking on the belly and on the front leg closest to us. 04:08, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

For lack of better words, the shading near to the lineart looks really... pixely, moreso on the back and tail-tip, but in a few other spots too. Not sure if it's like blurred lineart or just something odd?

Reuploaded 17:53, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us, near the paw? I feel like the shading there ends abruptly. And, could you make the shading less pixely, as Spooky stated? Branchwing (talk) 18:01, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:08, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Looking good! Smooth the shading on the farthest ear 18:17, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 18:26, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading? And smooth shading on both ears, top of head, tail, and two paws further from us

Reuploaded 02:09, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a little bit? Branchwing (talk) 02:41, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:00, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like you smoothed shading in only some places. Please smooth all of it, define shading depth, and there's some smudged/blurred lineart at the tip of tail and by the neck

Reuploaded 03:43, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Give some shape to the flank shading, it looks like a straight line 03:46, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:05, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on all of the paws and the ear farthest from us. Branchwing (talk) 12:21, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:54, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the back shading just a small bit? This is cool^ <span style="">20:32, 5/14/2017

Reuploaded Thank you! 21:01, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Idk if it's just me, but the earpink and the shading are making it look like there's a stray gray pixel in the earpink. And define the shading more on the tail and add more shading to the back paw closest to us on the paw itself, as it looks like it fades away. ANd it looks like also that the shading is leaking on the legs. Smooth the shading more as well, and recede the shading a tiny bit on the top of the head, as if the light's coming from the < and up area, there wouldn't be that much shadow there <span style="">21:40, 5/15/2017

Reuploaded 21:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a tiny bit on the top of the head and on the paws furthest away from us. It looks a bit sharp. 16:41, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading on the front paw farthest from us is leaking too far onto the toes, where it should be in all light <span style="">00:58, 5/17/2017

Reuploaded 01:41, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Hopekit (Ki) - CBA
I know the shading needs to be fixed and I'll get to that in a bit I just wanted to get this up 23:28, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

reups "fixed" shading. It's still bad but oh well. 23:42, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

darn I wanted this image Smooth out that little chest/belly shading?

reups heck sorry 23:53, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define stripes, unless I'm stupid and blind and they're not stripes? me 2 --

How would I do that though? They're the same color as the star, should I sharpen them? 00:47, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

on the star, the stripes seem to be um... thicker? maybe that would help. holy #@##$ this is super cute

Okay, I know you must've colorpicked, but this seems paler from the Star, unless it's my eyes again xD <span style="">04:20, 5/13/2017

Unfortunately, I disagree with you. The base color seems the same, it's just the tint that looks different.

I'm gonna reup soon, I lost this file and recovered an older version so I'm redoing the shading, but, yes, Broken I colorpicked from the most unshaded untouched spot I could find on the back. If this continues to be a problem, I'll try and get the star's file from Shrikestep 14:18, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups 14:33, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the stripes that are under the shading, as they seem to fade away a bit in shape

reups 15:03, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups waste and the belly shading was bothering me 18:04, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

I like this. Comments before approval? 17:50, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Spotted Fur (W) - CBA
Failed at matching my own pattern again 19:25, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading? Unless that's part of the pattern :P This is very beautiful Sziri! Your images never fail to amaze me :) <span style="">19:42, 5/14/2017

Re-ups Ohh,thank you 20:41, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw farthest from us? I really like this one Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:43, May 14, 2017 (UTC)chat

Maybe smooth the shading on both the front paws actually^ <span style="">20:50, 5/14/2017

Re-ups Thanks! 08:38, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">00:58, 5/17/2017

Pine Needle (W) - For Approval
I really like his name ^^ 08:09 15 May 2017

Define the light a little more on the back paw farthest from us, the tail, and smooth the earpink a little more? nice job! <span style="">21:44, 5/15/2017

Reuploaded Did my best, 04:32 16 May 2017

Smooth the shading on the back legs? Do you use Photoahop, or am I just a really unexperienced GIMP user? xD <span style="">19:18, 5/16/2017

Juniper Branch (W) ~ CBA
a simpler one 18:54, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define light on the tail? It looks wholly coated in shadow. --

Not really? You can see the light on > side of the tail because of the pattern <span style="">21:28, 5/15/2017

Define the shading depth just a smidge 23:01, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded' 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">00:59, 5/17/2017

Moonflower (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
All colors came from Bluestar's queen image, which I still have the files for. Comments? 22:53, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on both the back paws? 22:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a little on the neck/upper back area? 22:58, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:04, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Think shading's leaking on both front paws.

It's also leaking away from lineart on the back > of --> paw, near the rump area

Define the shading a little bit. Branchwing (talk) 00:36, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth also. <span style="">04:39, 5/17/2017

Dodge (L) - For Approval
<span style="">00:58 Tue May 16

Define the head shading a smidge Rainbowmistake (talk) 01:12, May 16, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded <span style="">14:27 Tue May 16

his chest and muzzle should be pale, and any other paler parts on here that aren't the legs could be defined. 00:45, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

His chest? On the rogue, I don't think his chest is pale. Unless it is and I'm not seeing it? <span style="">04:39, 5/17/2017

I'm pretty sure there would be a pale chest - it just appears to be under shading on the rogue, I think.

what spooky said. even colourpicking that area to another area in shadow gives a noticable difference in colour. 15:33, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Snowbird (A) - For Approval
Wow, I tried a dark green/blue shading tint and I actually don't mind it? Yay! 23:29, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Smooth out the shading a little on the face and chest, and maybe lighten the overall shading a tick or two. 23:49, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reup 00:20, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a little bit, and also define the chest light.

Jessamy (Ro) ~ Declined
Sheeeeeeeeee's back! ErmineGlow (talk) 00:41, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

You are unable to work on this image for another 4 days, because it was declined due to the one month limit. Please work on a different image <span style="">00:55, 5/17/2017

Oops. Sorry. ErmineGlow (talk) 00:56, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Dawn Mist (W) ~ For Approval
all colors from her queen image

There's a bunch of waste outside th eneck, beneath the ---> front paw, and ---> back paw. Also, in that chest fluff that hangs over, there are two pixels of waste that is common to get filled in. :) good job 02:09, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded waste all murdered, and thanks.

Define the shading depth on both the front legs and the back leg furthest from us. Nice <span style="">05:38, 5/17/2017

Re-uploaded xie xie, also changed some things on the white

Applefrost(Ki) ~ For Approval
I am aware of my trash attempt to texture, and the shading being too dark maybe. Comments for Applefrost? Also, the picture might look blurry?? Idk, it shows as blurry in the editor. <span style="">02:21, 5/17/2017

Is there white in the eye? Because I'm not seeing any at all. Also, it doesn't look blurry to me.

I can see the white. 02:28, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Defined it. There was texture and a bit of shading covering it. <span style="">02:38, 5/17/2017

Re-uploaded! Surprised nobody mentioned the shading depth yet o.o <span style="">04:30, 5/17/2017

Add a bit of light to the back paw darnit i wanted this 05:03, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! <span style="">05:24, 5/17/2017

The base looks green-tinted on the two screens I've looked at it on, idk, perhaps shift it a smudge?

I totally get the frustration of not being able to do images you want to do but can people stop guilt tripping each other over images they didn't get to do? I know it's not really against the rules or anything, but not everyone needs to hear it. Sorry if I came off as rude, but it's been happening a lot on the approval page. As for the image, the brown could be fixed with a reddish tint, or you could color pick from Appledusk (as they were said to look alike? Idk)

Seedpelt (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
I always had my eye on this guy ever since I first joined. Together at last... 02:27, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

I believe that their is white on the tail. This is really beautiful! Much better than mine. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:41, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define or expand the tail shading? Pretty^ <span style="">02:47, 5/17/2017

Define eye depth? And < ear pink if you can, if not that's alright. 02:48, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

I know I'm going to be told to stop, but the eye depth is very visible for me. <span style="">02:55, 5/17/2017

It's ok, I also agree that the eye depth is visible.

Reups <3 Ermine, there is white on the tail. What did you mean by that? 03:33, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

i guess you could expand it a little, as on the warrior it nearly takes up one third of the tail.

Deerdapple (E) - For Approval
I tried out a new shading style. All colors from her warrior. 03:17, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

This is gorgeous, Patch! I believe there is shading leaking on the chest right above the tail. 03:19, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! <3. I think I got it, not sure though. 03:24, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the head a wee bit? Do you use Photoshop? Your images are very pretty <span style="">04:34, 5/17/2017

Re-uploaded. Thank you! I use GIMP. 05:41, May 17, 2017 (UTC)