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Swallowtail (WC) (W) - For Approval
03:56, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Should I remove eye shading? 14:53, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, and define the light on the tail? 23:15, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:59, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add a bit more depth to the front legs shading, and smooth it out a touch on the haunch

'''reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. 00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the shading on the shoulder, and define the light (remove shading) on the tail. 15:14, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the earpink? I can't see it at all. 20:34, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

The eyeshine in < this eye appears to be overblurred. Can you also erase a few pixels on the eyeshine so more of the general pupil shows? -- 03:31, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the eye depth too while you're at it?

Still working?

reuploaded. 16:23, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the tail some more, especially along the bend closest to us? I also think the base may be slightly darker than the rest of the set? 22:14, October 20, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 15:21, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''sorry, a freaking remix won me over all week. 02:42, October 27, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add shading to the lower jaw, if you can. -- 22:10, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 05:18, October 29, 2019 (UTC)'''

Her nose appears darker on her other images. Define the light on the tail and perhaps add a bit more depth to her eyes? 16:27, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Splash (KP) (Kit) ~ For Approval
I.. attempted? 16:32, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

The forepaw farthest from us needs to be completely white, the foreleg needs more black, and I believe there should be more black near the back area, per the old kit. -- 16:35, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Just pondering, but perhaps since this is a graphic novel exclusive character, we should match their official image? We've done it for other cats who are exclusive to the graphic novels. ​​​​​​

I'm willing to change the pattern to match the novels, and I'm not sure whether I should re-upload it to match the original pattern.. 23:52, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you please? I was talking with Spooky about it and we both agree that we should be matching the images in the graphic novels, since that's the only images we have of them; they're consistent designs and should be kept. I'll go and nominate the other images in the set to follow suit. ​​​​​

I've garnered some reference images for you! 1 2 3 4 ^^ 03:57, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks! Re-Uploaded! 23:50, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the white, smooth out the shading on the white (especially on the back leg most visible). -- 23:54, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 01:03, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Snowbird (K) - CBA
-- 18:17, October 27, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the face shading and the middle area?

Reuploaded -- 03:05, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a little bit more, and smooth that middle section a little bit more too. It's still very hard-edged compared to the rest of your shading, and honestly, I think it could curve more with the flow of the body >> that way?

Reuploaded With the source I'm using the middle shading would be curving << (example image) -- 22:48, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

That actually doesn't make sense. Vec's got her shading there further >>> way placement wise on the arm, for one, and it's curved more definably as this is more shapeless. Secondly, this also has shading on the <<<< side of the arm when that does not. Thirdly, the number of images that also have shading on the midsection vastly outnumber those who not with this source from the face, tail, leg/haunch perspective, which implies this should too, as with what max said on it curving >> way.

Reuploaded I think I got everything..? -- 23:39, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah - CBA?

Swankit (Alt.K) - For Approval


So this could be the screen on my technology right now, but the base looks too dark compared to the previous version. -- 18:51, October 28, 2019 (UTC)

The original kit used highlights, which I rarely do on my images, so I tried colourpicking from an area that didn't have any.

Shadowsight (MC) - For Approval
i love him. 00:01, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thriftear (W) - For Approval
little peeved i missed shadowsight but w/e 00:11, October 29, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Is that texture I'm seeing?? If it is, I believe Patch said the kit (master pattern) didn't have it. -- 00:14, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

might just be me but her eyes look yellow? they're pale amber as per the new release

00:19, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

File:Thriftear.kit.png updated the eyes on the kit, letting you know to avoid any tweaking ^^ 00:41, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded there's texture on the kit and apprentice so... 00:50, October 29, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Here is where Patch said there wasn't any texture. It was only her shading style. -- 00:54, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, what i have is shading yes, but it looks so much like texture, i think it would be fine if Tyb keeps it on this. 00:56, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Flipclaw (W) ~ For Approval
new design 00:25, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Finchpaw (App) - For Approval
if she doesn't get named finchsong i will riot

Songpaw (App) ~ For Approval
Thought I'd spare anyone else from having to do this rediculous pattern I made.. 01:48, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the back legs and tail a little bit?

Re-Uploaded! 19:19, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Berrynose (D) ~ For Approval
definitely has issues; gonna tweak that when i have time (probably tomorrow)

Reuploaded or today

Myrtlepaw (A) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? 21:31, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Finleap. Potatoe, you can have her again if you want. 23:33, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, I do want her. Thank you for offering! -- 23:34, October 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Taking over again. -- 23:46, October 29, 2019 (UTC)