Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Rabbittail (W) ~ Redone
Oa be Sheepy, who removed her reservation - here's Rabbittail. 18:04, November 27, 2013 (UTC)

Make the texture curve on the chest, since it wouldn't just go in one direction - it would flow with the fur. Also, whiten the tail, since it looks a bit gray. I wanted this one D: 18:05, November 27, 2013 (UTC)

Also, try to make it flow on the neck, too - some would flow to the chest, some would flow to the back. 18:07, November 27, 2013 (UTC)

Could you make the tail more bunny-like? It seems really...un-bunnylike. Maybe make it a little more fluffy-ish?

Reups changes may not be showing the bunny hops along with the fluffy tail in the air   15:43, November 28, 2013 (UTC)

Define the earpink.

Reups  12:13, November 30, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and define the ear pink; I can't see it.

Reups  00:46, December 1, 2013 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Star) ~ Tweaked
Thanks for letting me have it, Beebs ouo I redid the shading and in the process, also redid the ear pink because it was ugly and merged with the base layer for some reason. o.O

Then can you smudge the eat pink a little more? 00:58 Sat Nov 30

I don't normally like to smudge my ear pink a lot, so I'd rather it stay like this. It's obvious it's smudged, and I've oversmudged before and it just looks bad.

Well you'll need to do something with it. Either smudge a bit more or blur it. It's very spiky and hard edged right now. Plus the smudging's too uniform, making it not really look like fur. {{User:Paleclaw/Sig2|03:35,11/30/2013}

Eh, I didn't think it was that hard-edged but okay then. o.o Re-uploaded.

Graywing (WC) (Ro) - Tweaked
Comments? Oa was Knight, shading tweak. -- 03:26 Sat Nov 30

Light source doesn't make much sense. Seems to be coming both from below him (which would be quite odd) and from his left.

River (Star) ~ Tweaked
Last tweaker be me, tweaked for stripes. I also defined the shading some on certain parts of the shading that weren't too visible due to the stripes. Comments? 04:25, November 30, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading?

re-up 04:00, December 1, 2013 (UTC)

Make the chest stripes curve with the chest? Prettttyyyyy  This is really really similar to a pattern I created for him in my free time like crazy similar   09:38 Sun Dec 1

Mossfire (W) ~ Redone
hella 23:14, November 30, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge te chest a bit more? This is hella pretty~ 09:35 Sun Dec 1

Leafstar's Mother (Star) - Redone
o god i fail.... OA was me. Redone to match Leadstar's new pattern. Changes 02:23, December 1, 2013 (UTC)

Add a bit of depth to the shading on the chin and the back? This is lovely~ 3:50 Sun Dec 1

Re-uploaded Changes 07:01, December 1, 2013 (UTC)

This is really pretty Scar, but I don't think this matches my queen pattern, more color-wise though. I can mail you an xcf, leave you hex codes, or give you some ways I did the texture and whatnot- just message me. 09:34 Sun Dec 1