Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Brightheart (Alt W) - Redone
Wheeee floofy! Got the pattern from the old version of the image. OA was scar and I'm too lazy to list all the reasons for redoing, go check the nominations page. xD Comments? 23:10, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. Perhaps lighten the shading a tad (especially the chest)? 19:03, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but nope, shading darkness is artist's choice. I like it dark. 21:04, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Brighty is so epical! This is just a person choice but maybe make the ear-pink a bit redder? 23:33, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Rather not, but if anyone else agrees I will. 08:34, December 14, 2012 (UTC)

Idk about making it more red, but perhaps define it a tad. 21:50, December 14, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt W2) - Redone
See above. :b Comments? 23:10, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading a wee bit? I love this somuch<3 22:42, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the botton of the ear-pink a touch too 23:34, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Kay. Won't have my files and gimp till tuesday or so though. So I'll do it then. 08:35, December 14, 2012 (UTC)

Whiskernose (A) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be less golden. Dunno bout the tone though. 12:35, December 15, 2012 (UTC)

Specklepaw (A) - Tweaked
Darkened the shading. OA was Loonie. 23:51, December 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight. 00:03, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur where the earpink meets the pelt and possibly define the speckles. 00:14, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) - Tweaked
Defined shading. OA was Leafstrike. Comments? 01:46, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I know this probably wasn't part of what you were supposed to do, but the earpink looks a very un-natural shade of pink, so maybe you should desaturate it a little or just change the shade al-together. Also, the shading is really dark; I can barely see the lineart. Can you lighten it a little please? 02:01, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine.. 02:20, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think Sunny's right. While I can see the lineart, it does look an little bit to dark to me, might be my screen though. 02:35, December 16, 2012 (UTC)