Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 154

Mintkit (YS) (Star) - Approved
I say I hate textured cats and I go and do one! 21:54, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

Contour the texture to match how the muscles are located on the cat. That will probably make doing texture a bit more pleasant for you to work with ^^. Believe me, it takes a lot of practice but once you get the hang of texture you will want every solid cat to have it. If you need help, just post on my talk page and I will explain it in more detail (: 22:06 Thu Apr 21

The shading looks like it's leaking away from the lineart on the bottom of the chest between the paws a little bit

Reup I'll play around with it a bit more later when I'm not tired... 23:02, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit? 01:21, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 06:48, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

There should be some shading on <-- leg/paw.

Could you blend the shading on the back a bit more? It looks like a stripe rather than shading.  10:04 Fri Apr 22 

Reupload IDk 14:51, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the bottom of the charcat on the belly.

Reupload Fixed thanks Spooky! 15:41, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a lot 20:59, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 21:46, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

lighten it and smooth it out a lot more still 23:51, April 22, 2016 (UTC)

make the shading on the head curve more with the body.

It's curving already so I don't know if you want me to make that more apparent or... 06:39, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

It hink the kit has a slightly lighter chest and muzzle? someone else have a look and confirm/deny 08:43, April 23, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I added the pale chest. 10:55, April 24, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a tad more. Great job! 17:11, April 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 16:51, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

Thin out the shading, lighten it, smooth it out, and define it on her chest and paws. 23:41, April 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smoothed it out but I don't want to lighten it to much as the kit is pretty dark. 18:36, April 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the left paw?

Reupload played around with the shading. 19:29, April 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out and lighten the shading. 00:42, April 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smudged it some and changed tint because I like it! 15:20, April 29, 2016 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.

Reupload 22:49, April 30, 2016 (UTC)

Could you make the shading on the right paw flow more with the anatomy if you know what I mean? just a lil' curve

i can't see your light source

Reupload fixed shading but I don't see what I can do about the light source. I can see it just fine. 09:09, May 2, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out that bit of shading in the shoulder of ---> foreleg. Also, I can't see the light source either. 20:43, May 2, 2016 (UTC)

let me explain: the back tells me the light is hitting ==> towards that direction, and the head tells me the light is coming from the right (above). You need to change either to make the light source consistent.

Also, please curve the shading on the front leg closest to us according to the body.

Reupload fixed the light source and curved the shading. 19:28, May 3, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but the shading is way too hard edged and thick, please fix that. 05:01, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

Thin shading is not a requirement of the project. It's not too thick, and it's perfectly fine.

Could you smooth it a little on the right paw? I think it's fine everywhere else

Reupload 16:03, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

I didn't say it was a requirement. It looks too thick right now, and I still think it could be smoothed everywhere. is smoothed even a word? 17:41, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

I'm going to wait for a second opinion on the shading as I like it and I'm worried if I blend it too much I will get told to define the light. 18:07, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

Can you blend it on the paw again? I think it's much too hard edged just right there

Reupload fixed the paw. 18:32, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

What's on her chest? Is it shading? If it is, can you blur it? If it isn't, then the other image doesn't have it - I'm sorry if I'm being picky, it's just really really sharp and I'm not sure what it is. 18:46, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

Do you mean the pale chest? 19:16, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

OH I see what she means. Can you lighten the shading on the chest a little, cause the contrast between the pale chest and the shading on the paleness makes it look super sharp if you know what I mean

I don't think it looks sharp at all and I feel like there are images with shading that has a sharper contrast than mine. 19:31, May 4, 2016 (UTC)

I have to agree with Spooky, sorry. 19:35, May 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I tried to fix it but I don't know how to if it gets commented on again as I don't see it. 20:27, May 7, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

I hate to break the CBA, but the shading on the chest looks hard edged compared to the shading everywhere else.

I would like a second opinion on this as I think it looks fine. 10:46, May 9, 2016 (UTC)

All I can really see from your last upload to now is that you moved the shading further up the chest, so can you try to smudge/blur that spot a little more?

Reupload I'm not smoothing it out anymore as I have smoothed it out 5 times already and it's getting a bit nit picky now. 16:35, May 9, 2016 (UTC)

Oh my dear Lord Velvet. This looks amazing! Could you define the left ear a little. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 19:13, May 9, 2016 (UTC)

Do you mean the depth of shading because there isn't any light there. 17:07, May 10, 2016 (UTC)

teh ear pink I can't even tell its there. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 17:16, May 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload that's as bright as I'm gonna get it. 18:57, May 10, 2016 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the ear pink more saturated? I think the reason it's hard to tell it's there is because it looks a bit gray-ish. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:02, May 13, 2016 (UTC)

I made it more bright it's bright pink! I can see it clearly. 18:52, May 13, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 15:47, May 16, 2016 (UTC)

Just a reminder, Velvet, three days is three days. It needs to be exactly that before you ask for comments, and you still had a few more hours to go. That being said, I can't see anything wrong with this, so let's try for a CBA again..

Approved.