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Cinderpelt (MCA) ~ Redone
Help me... OAs were several artists, I think the most recent was Beebs. I have failed... 18:58, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? 19:01, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reups. ''' 19:05, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Can you make the smoke match mine a bit more? This is great! 19:14, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Define the smoke a bit more and define the texture. Do you want the file, or did I already give it to you? 19:54, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Reups no, I'm okay, thanks. And danke, Hawk. 21:13, October 7, 2013 (UTC)

The smoke needs to be smudged with a smaller brush, as it looks clumpy in comparison to the StarClanner. I also used a 1px brush for this. 02:44, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

There's also smoke on the paws and the back of her legs on the StarClanner, too. I can't tell if you've added it or not. 02:44, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 17:21, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm, it seems like the way you smudged is like, straight rather than curved with the body. how do you do this stuff all on pixlr?! 07:03 Wed Oct 9

I think it's fine, really. 14:47, October 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think the texture could be curved to fit the shoulders and haunch a bit more. 04:33, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 17:08, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Curve it a little more along the shoulder, and define/add smoke along her upper lip. 14:41, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 15:59, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

Did you forget to fill the nose? 😝 05:46 Mon Oct 14

Reups 15:54, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

The smoke continues all the way up the back of the forelegs, and wouldn't stop below the elbow. It would likely stop showing at the elbow, but not before. Also the chest's smoke seems over-smudged. the transition isn't so dramatic and flared out quite like that...look at the StarClanner for what I mean. 01:11, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reups. 13:25, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the textre a little- it's very faint on her other image. 23:59, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reups. 12:00, October 17, 2013 (UTC)

The smoke also continues onto the bottom of her toes on the StarClanner- you'll want to do the same on this one. 23:34, October 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reups. 15:39, October 18, 2013 (UTC)

Are you sure you don't want the .xcf? This still looks pretty dark compared to the starclanner. 23:30, October 18, 2013 (UTC)

No. And I colour picked in the lightest places. 23:47, October 18, 2013 (UTC)

I had texture blurring most of the lightest places- you won't get the real base color, and the texture is the same color as the base color, just with a different layer setting, so your results are gonna be off. 00:13, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

But the texture is on the same layer as the base and smoke because pixlr-smudging-on-different-layers leaves black lines. >.> 01:08, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Skyheart (A) - Redone
idk this might be unrealistic but if it is I'll redo it. OA was me redone for many reasons. Comments? 19:51, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

Where's your light source? No offense, but the shading is quite blotchy, define it tons. Make the m on the forhead curve with the skull 00:47 Tue Oct 15

Hmm.. the stripes appear to be a tad pixely? Maybe blur them ever so slightly? Also, the shading's not blotchy, imho, but it /could/ use some defining.

With all complete honesty, this does look a little unrealistic... In a good way, though

I think they're fine, honestly. This is great, Duck! 22:50, October 18, 2013 (UTC)

Well no they could be blurred a little bit. I mean just so they don't looks so... pixely and stuff. It doesn't even need to be a lot; just on a lower setting so it gives it a little more of a natural feel to it. Also, Duck, you still working on this?

Cinderpelt (Alt A) - Redone
OA was Rainly with tweaks by me, needed to be redone to be a smoky cat. I did my best to match, I color picked from the SC image and followed the MCA image to make sure the two matched. This was a blast to do! Any comments for improvement? 16:36, October 15, 2013 (UTC)

(if it's not showing, http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/c/cf/Cinderpelt.apprentice.alt.png ) 16:44, October 15, 2013 (UTC)

Psst, wrong heading, dear.=P Could you blur the edges of the ear pink a bit?

Lighten the shading a smidgen and blur it. 20:19, October 15, 2013 (UTC)

Would you like to have the .xcf? Your colors look a little darker than what I was using. 01:13, October 16, 2013 (UTC)

Mole (Cat) (Ro) - Tweaked
Oa was me, tweaked for rumpled fur. Comments? 02:11 Sat Oct 19

Maybe add some on the legs? Sexy~ 02:13, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

re-ups 02:40 Sat Oct 19

The tufts of rumpled fur are a little round, if you ask me. (kinda like fingers) Can you make the ends more pointy, like the way fur drapes down? (sprry if im just confusing) This is AMAZING, Raven, good job! :) 15:56 Sun Oct 20

Rosetail (A) ~ Tweaked
OA be me, tweaked for colors, comments? 14:29, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a tad? 16:29, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Shading darkness is up to the artist, I think, and this was nominated for colors only, I believe ouo 16:31, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Just because it was only nominated for one thing, doesn't mean another can't be suggested. Personally, I agree with Loonie. Yeah, darkness is artist's choice, but a little bit wouldn't hurt anyone.

re-up okie dokie, then, a little bit c:> 16:44, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Rosetail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA be me, same reasons as above. Comments? 14:29, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA is me and I redid the shading.

Might be just my pc or the tiny kit blanks, but the shading is a little thinner than the warrior? no offense, but again i cant see your source. The body reads a source from the left, and the rest of his body reads from the right.. Not trying to be rude, though. 15:53 Sun Oct 20

Of course the shading's going to be thinner? It's a smaller blank, and again, all of mine are shaded like this, and until I get another opinion, I will not change it, due to me being told multiple times it's fine.

Rabbitleap (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is me and I redid the shading.

Sorry, not trying to be mean, but, I still can't see your source. Maybe erasse some shadig left of the thigh and left side of the face? The shoulder should have round shading (idk how to explain it). 'tis wonderful, cloudy! 15:50 Sun Oct 20

Uh, I shade all of my apprentices like this? And it's literally the same shading as Tawnypelt's alt apprentice, which I was told by a couple people it was fine, one or two of them who are more experienced than a vast majority of the project...so, I'd really rather not change it.