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Ashfur (TC) (W) - Tweaked
Looks SO much better <3 OA was me and shading needed blended and I toned it down slightly (upon further inspection I figured the image was too dark) What'cha guys think? 05:55, September 27, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a tad? :3 05:59 Thu Sep 27

Can you blur the earpink a bit? 20:21, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 04:49, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W) - Tweaked
Ok, stupid, n00by me made the colors and stripes all on the same layer, so I had to resort to an experimental method of changing her color, hue saturation tool I think it's called. I had a side-by-side reference for the color, so it should match. I fixed the tail highlight. The OA is me and I believe Mountain tweaked the tail (correct me if I'm wrong) 06:14, September 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken her a bit more, and darken the stripes. 14:03, September 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear-pink a bit more? It looks a bit... blocky x3. Raineh Has returned :D  17:46, September 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, um, I still have the very old file where the stripes are not blurred, I could seperate them from the base pelt color. I feel like the dodgy highlights and the front white paw are unfixable as it is, I can keep the shading and the tail, is it alright if I go back and fix it up? (since I never got the chance to vote) 01:18, September 28, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it, Ivy. I see no problems with that.

Reuploaded amg this looks so much better ;-; 04:50, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does. It looks soooo much better. Can you blur the white paw a little?

Maybe brighten up the highlights a tad so she doesn't look so dark? 12:08, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh much much better. Brighten the whole thing to match, and blur/smudge the earpink. 14:01, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Highlights were not used this time around and colors were taken directly from the queen. So, uhhh...I can't do much with the color situation. ^^; Unless the shading was tinted a certain color? Mine's tinted red  16:31, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Q) ~ Redone
Sooooooo, Ifailsobad. This is my uh, re-re-attempt. IthinkIdidalittlebetterthistime. OA was me, with a redo by me 8D 00:34, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think the black looks a bit lighter on the warrior. And try using a paint brush brush or chalk brush for the stripes to give them the look they have on the others. 18:34, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading.

Re-uplaoded. DX 00:28, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing a bit. 14:25, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Fallowkit (Ki) tweaked
I swear on my life this is tweaked. These cats are the worst to shade x.x Shading needed blurring and she needed to be light brown. I went ahead and defined the earpink a little bit too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:05, October 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make it less green, give it a light source, get rid of the waste, and make her not cross eyed. 08:01, October 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the backside. 20:36, October 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes refuse to show. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:39, October 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her a little more. 00:13, 02, 10, 2012

And can you define the nosepink too? 00:19, 02, 10, 2012

Reuploaded. Waste x.x -mutters darkly- Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 01:17, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

This looks redone.... like... a lot. However, get rid of the waste, darken her a smidge, make her less cream and more brown, blur the shading. and lighten it. Also make the nose the same color as the earpink, or brown. 02:28, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Where exactly is the light source? The shading doesn't make much sense... and I agree with Paleh; it looks sorta redone...

Reuploaded =S Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 14:03, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the front leg. There isn't any. o.o

There's still waste around the head and left side of the body. If you have a selection tool (every program -should- have one) and if you use layers, select outside the lineart on the lineart layer, then go to the shading layer and go to edit---> clear, then select none. Should take care of any waste on any image! Also, the shading doesn't seem to reach the edges of the lineart, make it touch :3  16:39, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 16:41, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Unless I'm looking at the wrong image, there's still some waste. 17:33, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Killed waste. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 18:13, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. W2) - Tweaked
Wahhh!! She's ugly as a grayscale! 00:57, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. 01:03, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:11, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading aside from the highlighs? If I don't make sense, I'm sorry x3 she looks pretty as a grayscale 8D 03:33, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenheart (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be pale brown. Everything is exactly the same as the MC. OA was me. Comments? 01:26, 02, 10, 2012

Beetlenose (W) ~ Redone
Redone cause of shading and earpink and stuff....OA was some n00b called .Trollsky. 8'D 06:35, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Hmm... I wonder who that n00b could possibly be? Certainly not /you/.

Re-uploaded. Of course not. :O 12:04, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I did the best I could to make the shading match Cloudy's previous one. Besides that I lightened it to match the apprentice. Changes are not showing, comments? 11:27, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the chest highlight slightly and blur the shading. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 14:27, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the leg (right now, half of the front legs appear to be in shadow)  16:35, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Marshscar (L) - Redone
Wheeee. No clue who the last OA was since Shelly moved the file. Shading needed to be tweaked, and scars needed to be less paintbrushy Comments? 13:57, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad. And the last OA was Wildfire.

A little bit of waste above the tail. 17:34, October 2, 2012 (UTC)