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Wing (PH) - Redone
Okay... I have been simply dying to redo this. The gray was placed awkwardly so it looked like really weird shading. If anyone has any real vices with me redoing this, I can take it down and revert it. OA was Shadowedheart, with a tweak by Bramble, and then a redo by Moonflight and Cloudy. Comments? 05:43, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the grey a little. 16:13, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Explain to me what was wrong with this image. I do have a problem with you re-doing it. It needed to match her queen image, which it did. I have a major issue with this, because it was one of the quickest I'd ever completed, and I thought it was perfect. 20:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)


 * If you have problems with images that get proposed and accepted for tweak, take it up with the project leadership and spearhead a revamp of the process by which tweaks are proposed and given permission. Don't attack those redoing images. Instead find out why it was approved and discuss it with the person who approved the tweak. 22:07, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno... please, please don't get mad at me, but the placement of the grey on all of her images is a bit awkward. I can't tell is the grey on the bottom is shading or not just by looking. 21:56, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Now, Scarlet, could you please lighten the shading a bit? 21:59, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Why does the pattern have to be changed though? I have no problem with this being redone just fr say, better shading, or defining the patches, but personally I liked the old pattern. Can't you keep that and just define the patches or something? I don't wanna cause drama, I just liked the old patter.  Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  02:28, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. Cloudy would have given you the .xcf to touch it up. 02:35, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If everyone would like to keep the old version, I'm perfectly fine with that. I just say that Gorsetail's pattern had been redone and I figured that cats with the same pattern should be redone. And if Cloudy would like to tweak it, I'm fine with that to (she asked earlier). 04:07, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

But the pattern's not the same thing. Just look at the queen image. It only looks that way because the PH blanks are a little smaller and harder to work with. If you don't mind, I'll take over on it, as I do in fact have the .xcf file, and I'm working on it now. It's looking better, actually. 04:14, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Fine by me. 04:15, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tweaked the patches, lowered the opacity on the mud, and tweaked the eye, 'cause I thought the color was too plain. 16:43, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you remove the brown paws though? I never really understood why she had them. She's not mentioned with them as far as I know, and they have mud splotches, not mud covering their legs.  Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  20:45, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. And make the mud more splotchy so she looks like a gray and white cat with mud, not a gray and brown cat :P 02:09 Mon Jan 16

Personally, I think the streaks are fine. I can look at this image and clearly tell it's a gray and white cat. 20:28, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

At least burn the mud, then. It's too light. 03:39 Wed Jan 18

Not all mud is the same shade of brown, it looks fine. -- Elo legs   19:42, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you, Elo. Also, each artist has their own style, and honestly, I don't like copying other user's styles. 20:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, I know mud can be different colours and all, but the mud is only barely distinguishable from the pelt, and only 'cause I know it's supposed to be mud. 05:56 Thu Jan 19

Honestly, I agree with Wildy. If you didn't know it was mud, you'd think she was just a brown and white cat. also, can you lighten the white a bit?  Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:20, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Fine. Re-uploaded. Does that look better? >.> Seems nothing I do is good enough for you guys. It's freaking mud. It's supposed to blend in and make the white fur darker. Ever seen a cat covered in mud? xD 18:21, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the mud a tad more. I liked the mud better before xD. -- Elo legs 19:38, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I know, so did I. But, if I kept it like that, certain people would continue to ask me to change it, thus being counterproductive. Now, I'll tweak her queen version once I'm back home, since this connection is very hit-or-miss. 19:49, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

People will think what they think. Make the earpink a bit paler. Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  21:29, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Cloudy? 03:47, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yeahm seems Cloudy's internet may be out again. I haven't seen her on the wiki in a week. Someone else take over? 13:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) ~ Tweaked
OA was Echomist, tweaked by Splashpelt14. Highlights needed to be blurred. 00:17, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define the shading on the tail. Also, perhaps darken or lighten the earpink, basically just make it noticable. 05:27, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:24, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

24 hrs without comments, yay. 20:38, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded the face gray was hard to see 22:47, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. 23:27, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:14, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

There's a ring of waste around the entire image. 22:14, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:44, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more please. 21:32 Wed Jan 25

Reuploaded 22:03, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eye. 00:33, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstripe (W) ~ Redone
Comments? 02:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Gray background...? 02:03, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

It's gone. 02:05, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the base pelt color and the stripes 02:06, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

...Stupid uploading problems. Well, it's gone, and OA was Bluestar1776 and redone/tweaked by Shimmerpool. Shading and stripes needed to be redone. 02:08, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:10, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 02:25, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a lot and make sure the pattern matches up completely with the loner image. 09:27 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded. I darkened and blurred the stripes (they needed blurring), and blurred the neck shading. Comments? 17:12, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wow! Can you make stripes darker more? 18:29, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

They (stripes) look too blurred next to the other images, can you fix that? ^^ Sky Watchu want? 02:26, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also darkened the main pelt color. -- 06:04, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps lighten up the black on the muzzle a tad, I can't see the lineart o3o Sky Watchu want? 01:49, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

You know what, it says he's a dark gray-black tabby, so shouldn't his base coat be much darker on all his images? It's silver right now. That's nothing link dark gray-black. Would you mind tweaking it on here since it's up right now anyways? 22:58, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think this is good. 00:30, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Where was he called dark gray-black? It needs to be cited. 00:34, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I just checked the page cited for that. He isn't called dark grey-black. Change it back.  00:39, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I think he was mentioned as a dark gray tabby, not gray, or gray-black. But I'll follow the description, whatever it is. 00:40, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I see now. In Into the Wild allegiances, he's described as a sleek black-and-gray tabby tom. 00:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

That was referring to his base color being grey and his stripe color being black. 00:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Alright. Reuploaded. 00:52, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well since it says just gray in his description now, can you make the base coat match the other images? It's a bit dark right now. 07:59, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (KP) - Tweaked
White needed to be blurred. OA = Sunspirit with a tweak by Wild. I just stuffed it up more. 03:49, Sun, Jan, 22, 2012

Can you define the shading on the white part of the face? 01:04, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink a bit more visible? 13:18, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

And blur it a tad more? 22:34, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  02:15, Tue, Jan, 24, 2012

there's an odd white spot at the very top of the head. Can you fix it? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  05:01, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Changes aren't showing. <span style="">01:53, Wed, Jan, 25, 2012

Define the transition between white and gray and smudge it a bit to match the warrior version. <span style="">02:08 Thu Jan 26

Reuploaded -  Better? Or should I smudge/blur it more? <span style="">08:18, Thu, Jan, 26, 2012

I'd redraw the gray and white border and re-smudge it and then blur it. Smudge it with the smallest brush possible. Right now it's kinda blotchy. <span style="">02:26 Fri Jan 27

Antpelt (W) - Tweaked
Woohoo, he needed more scars. OA was Bramble. No offense to whoever did them, but can I please get rid of those unrealistic, blocky scars and do new ones? If not, that's okay, but they look more like worms than scars. 00:25, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Please do. <span style="">00:51 Mon Jan 23

Agreed. That's why I put it on the list o.e <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 00:56, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oh, Clone Tool, I love you. How's this? 01:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink? 02:05, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the earpink. 02:44, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

I can't really see the earpink...Define it? 02:50, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:56, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  00:02, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Man, you guys just love nitpicking earpink o.o 17:38, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the chest/throat scars a little "deeper". 22:37, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean "deeper"? Should the colour be darker, or should they just have be thicker? 04:01, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Thicker, but not too much 15:38, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:35, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Susan (KP) ~ Redone
OAs were Mistypebble and *Ivypool*. The stripes needed to be redone. Comments? 12:59, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely Silver! Can you add some more stripes to the shoulder and haunch? 14:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Okay.. Center and make the earpink bigger. 22:14, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:06, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? Marvelous~ 00:15, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:25, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and make it bigger. <3 <span style="">01:33 Tue Jan 24

Reuploaded  12:29, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a few more stripes radiating from her spine closer to the bottom of her haunch? It looks a little bare there with no stripes branching off the main one. 19:43, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:17, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a little more stripes in the bare spot at the end of the tail? 03:30, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:50, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Brindleface (Ki) - Tweaked
I darkened shadings on the parts where i think they are. OA is Ivypool (?, im confused about it) ,16:33,January 23,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink colour more like the warrior's. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 22:21, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Perty! Blur the earpink too. <span style="">23:52 Mon Jan 23

Reuploaded ,14:47,January 25,2012 (UTC)

Fill in the white bit in between the legs. <span style="">02:05 Thu Jan 26

Reuploaded ,15:51,January 26,2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Alt. Ki) - Redone
Okay, this was on the list for redoing because the stripes needed to be redone...The OA was Goldenpaw with a change of the nose by Ivy. I'm not such a big fan of it...Comments? 17:50, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

I love this <3 Lighten the nose. 23:36, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - PSE was finally nice to me. :P It made this image. :3 23:44, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little. You so good... <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 23:58, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lies. 00:01, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft. When do I lie except all the time? Darken the earpink a tad. :P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 00:19, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I knew you lied. :P Naw, anyway, comments? 00:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Sagefur.kit.alt. 20:08, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Whut. Don't mind me. Leave it be ^^ 20:09, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blank pixels. :o Changes may or may not be showing. 22:12, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure all the shading is the same darkness. <span style="">02:03 Thu Jan 26

Er...What? *doesn't understand that* :3 <span style="">02:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * The shading is all a very dark gray... 02:16, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well the shading should be solid on the back near the hind paw. It doesn't look solid. <span style="">02:24 Fri Jan 27

Bella (KP) - Tweaked
Bahahahaa. Tweaked patches and defined shading. OA=Sandstar 03:51, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

No need to go nuts xD Blur the smudging a wee bit? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 04:21, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I cant blur them without overblurring them. This is one of the reason pixlr sucks 06:08, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can't you lower the ocupancy (major spelling fail) of the blurr brush? 12:03, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

...you can do that? ._. 15:21, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Not in pixlr I don't think. You can lower the rate, but not the opacity. They're two different things. Gimp can lower both. :P <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  16:30, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the depth in her eyes? 19:42, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Aha! You admit Pixlr sucks! 8D Can you make the brown less greeny? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 20:21, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tabby spot on her head 01:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - lolwhut? Whats "pixlr"? *Trollface* 01:55, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Now this is a tweak. Blur the stripes on the left a tad. 03:36, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the brown on her face by her eye to match the other patches. Pixlr is that terrible thing uou se, claiming it to be good :P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 04:38, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar, you just had to make that comment, didn't you? Lighten the nose colour. 03:05, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Moon, be nice now. Don't start anything. Is it just me or is the shading placement on the brown different than on the white? 0.o 04:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well, she said that rude comment. 18:28, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well you could have just ignored it. So enough. If you still have something to say, take it to the talk pages or outside the wiki. This isn't helping the image at all. 21:21, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Oddfoot (W) - Redone
OA was Flamingomom. He was a triangle tabby, and honestly looked more ginger than brown. Comments? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  05:42, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh, this is absolutely one of my favorite chararts. <3 It looks amazing. Define the tail shading? <3 19:34, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Best I can do with such a thin tail. Thanks Twi dear. ^^ 03:22, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Ki) ~ Redone
Ew...OA was Sparrowsong with a redo by Mistystar. Needed to match the warrior image. Comments for improvement? 06:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? If you got it from the warrior image, then nevermind. It's probably because the shading's dark on the other image. Lovely -- 06:05, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you just lighten up the shading around the nose area? I thought he had a darker muzzle o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 20:19, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I took the earpink and muzzle color exactly from the warrior, but I still lightened the muzzle a tad, and I defined the earpink a tad. 00:35, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ro) - Tweaked
His white paw needed to be on the other foot. OA was Mumble785, with a redo by myself. 17:44, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

His, kit charart has white foot on the other side... ,17:47,January 24,2012 (UTC)

I have no idea. They're both on the tweak page. 17:58, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Probably to do with ze manga. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 20:17, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

According to the magna, it's on the right paw. 20:20, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

That is the right paw o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 20:22, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well then there you go. I did it right. 20:31, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I meant right as in correct xD 20:31, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Oh English, you're so misleading o3o 20:35, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. All right, so I tore his ear, but I don't really know if I need to, so it may be reverted. 18:12, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Milkfur (WC) (D) - Redone
This was accidentally declined so I'm putting it back up, I did fix the suggestions you guys made so...yeah :P 19:24, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hehe silly Shelly declining it... XD Anyways, shrink the earpink a bit? Pwease? o3o <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  19:28, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Of course ^^ 19:38, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the shading look a touch blue/greenish? Did you use black as the shading color? 01:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I took the base color and darkened it a bunch, then hit the transparency button on the layers dialoug and colored in the black a very dark creamy white color, because Paly had suggested for me to colorize the shading some. What color do you believe would be a more suitable shading tint? 03:37, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Well, when I did Purdy, first I shaded him in gray, but it made him look kinda blueish. Maybe try a rich brown? 04:10, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded is this better? ^^ 17:51, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots, it looks blotchy. 03:10, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded is this better? 03:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Much. :) Blur the shading just a bit and it will be perfect. ^^ 04:51, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Henry (KP) ~ Redone
Was on the Tweak list for being redone. OA was Bramble. This is horrible >:U 21:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Not. Horrible. Great. Is there a tabby M? If it's those two lines then disregard this... 21:33, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's just two lines. 21:36, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the back lines more maybe use the eye ref. on the tutorial, and darken the shading under his 'arm' 22:34, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think you should darken the overall shading. 00:29, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I was kind of confused about what you said, Wild. 03:07, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

And about the eyes, I copied 'em off of CLoudtail. 03:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look kind weird though, like his eyes are bugging out about a worm on the ground or something. Could you copy off the tutorial? They look more natural on there. 05:26, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes and thicken them. ,15:18,January 25,2012 (UTC)

I meant smudge the stripes into the fur, and the part where the belly meets the front arm there should be some shading, and use the PCA charart tutorial use the eye chart. 15:42, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. You guys were right abou tthe eyes xD 21:48, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the tail? <span style="">00:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the end of the stripes, darken the shading, add depth to the eyes, and add a couple more stripes to the legs. <span style="">01:55 Thu Jan 26

Lighten/define the earpink some more, too. I can barely see it. o3o 02:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (W) ~ Redone
This needed to be redone because it was a triangle tabby. It was on the list. OA was Sandstar. Comments? 05:25, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Nice! Can you define the stripes from a pelt a bit? 05:27, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you ^^ 05:34, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful, maybe define the tail stripes a little, I <3 Thornclaw(xHazeltail XD) 19:10, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Thank you Wild! ThornxHazel is a hilarious (yet creepy) pairing XP 23:40, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Windflight (E) ~ Redone
Eh... Not sure if this looks like a tabby. It was on the redo list. OA was Minnowclaw. Comments? 05:56, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think you smudged it too much. 12:05, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Just add some stripes to his ears. 15:24, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oh sweet! Thank you Shelly :D 15:40, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink he's super cute :) 15:44, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Wild 8D 15:48, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes...I dun know, it looks like a mottled tabby... 03:20, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can't really do that without messing up the design o3o If someone agrees, I will. 04:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Just erase a bit between the stripes and blur it. It should be fine. 04:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:33, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Ehh... maybe blur the stripes just a tiny bit more. 23:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded People on chat said that he looked mottled so I redid the stripes. 01:00, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (W) - Redone
It was a triangle tabby. OA was Sandy. Comments? 03:23, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Dewspots (W) - Redone
Meh.. A bit dark. Triangle tabby. OA was Echoheart, with a redo by Rainwhisper. Comments? 03:23, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? Right now, if I didn't know this was Dewspots, I would think this was just a mottled cat 03:24, January 26, 2012 (UTC) Nevermind, I saw you reuploaded that change on your own

Can you define the shading? 03:53, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:26, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (L) - Redone
I still despie Brokenstar cause of the whole Badgerpaw thing, but maybe this will make me like him more. ;D He was a triangle tabby and needed to be redone. OA was Bramble, with tweaks by Moonflight and Iceheart, then a redo by Mountainheart. :) Comments? 04:19, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is loverly<3 Just define the earpink a tad. =3 01:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) - Tweaked
Edited shadings..first true OA is Shaf Girl, then Bramble and Cloudskye ,15:49,January 26,2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of white on the side, and the flank shading is darker than the rest. Could you either darken the rest or lighten that part? This is lovely. :) 22:13, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Littlebird (E) ~ Tweaked
It needed to be less neon and bright.. I don't think changes are showing. :P 20:27, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't realise I went over the limit >.< 20:29, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Don't worry, we all do that sometimes. XD Declining for now. You can repost when it's under the limit again. :P 21:19, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Its okay now. :3 23:05, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Why did she have white on her before? 0.o That wasn't artist's choice till recently.... Anyways, could you lighten it? And maybe make it a bit orange tinted, it makes it look more natural. 02:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the "highlights" 02:30, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) (Alt. Ki) - Redone
Hmm... wonder what this will get declined for... Original artist was LightMoon, and it was a triangle tabby. 23:22, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:26, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I loove this Moon!♥ Define the earpink. 23:27, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

It also seems like there's a stripe in the earpink? not completely sure that's what it is, it just looks like it. I couldn't tell it was earpink at first, so could you make it completely solid? And darken the shading. 23:32, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's just the dark part of the earpink. If you really want it removed, I could on the next reupload. 23:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 23:52, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also blurred the shading. 00:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

There appears to be some waste abover her left ear. Can you remove that? x3 01:41, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It has a purplish tint to it. Could you alter the base color a bit to fix this? Up the orange in your brown to make a more chocolatey color. 01:44, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Ki) ~ Redone
Sorry this is sloppy Dx OA was Quietstep with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart. Comments? 23:25, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) ~ Redone
Redone to match his apprentice. Haha, I'll never have a simple design for Redwillow! Anyway, I got permission from Scarlet a while ago when I did his apprentice charart. OA was Maplefern with tweaks/redos by Cloudskye, Icestorm, and me. 23:39, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful <3 Blur the earpink a tad. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the earpink a little 23:49, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Comments? 23:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason for tweaking? 23:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:45, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I was getting there OA Sandstar12 needed to match others 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome, blur the earpink. 23:50, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, this is over the limit Wildfire. You can post again when there's space. 23:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Ignore me, I was looking at the table of contents and there's a blank heading for some reason. You're fine. XD Sorry. :P 23:56, January 26, 2012 (UTC)