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Clear Sky (ES) ~ CBA
#screams# CLEAR SKY IS MY BAE

The shading is really dark on the bottom, could you lighten it some? 09:57, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere. 10:12, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Ferncloud has darker shading than this but oh well.

Lighten it a bit more. Please remember that the same shading darkness/style doesn't always work on every blank and pattern. 10:44 Tue Oct 20

re-ups Ferncloud was a lot darker than this. Just sayin

define the earpink on our left 17:50:10 October 20, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the earpink just fine 19:20, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

i agree it should be defined. such a thing as different monitor settings. 20:23, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Looking at the other images, the color is a bit too soft. Maybe sharpen it a little more to match the other images? --Dewsplash (talk) 01:59, October 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:59, October, 21, 2015

re-ups I did the earpink, but I think the color matches. It might be because I used highlights on him, or because of my shading. I tried to match the leader, but realized the leader's texture is different from the ancient and rogue. Should I match those instead?

The leader came first, so all images should match that.

In that case, I personally think this matches enough...

CBA? 01:33, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but can you define the facial shading a tad? 14:39, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be lightened a bit, actually.

The shading is fine 23:30, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

I still think it needs to be defined and or lightened. 23:33, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

fine.

Re-CBA? 02:27, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Quiet Rain (ES) - CBA
Hola. 10:11, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define/darken the tail shading.

Re-uploaded 11:55, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 01:33, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

The tail shading still looks flat- define it a lot more.

Re-uploaded 02:11, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 02:27, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Violet Dawn (ES) ~ For Approval
God Berry's blanks are so beautiful ;; 11:57, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

theres a random streak of grey in the black of her hind paw, and could you maybe remove a tiny bit of the shadow on the front paw closest to us so the black is a bit more visible? 13:06, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

She doesnt have just black paws, she has blsck tipped paws so its fine the way it is. As for the shadow on the front paw, ill get to that when i get home 19:19, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

dude i know >.> all im saying is theres a random hard edged grey line that looks really out of place. christ. 20:02, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups 02:12, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There are random of light gray on her cheek. Add more shadow there? --Dewsplash (talk) 02:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:14, October, 21, 2015

Thats her cheekbone. Its fine 02:25, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Well, could you smooth it out a bit? It seems a bit too...abrupt, for lack of a better word. Also, lighten the shading on the belly a little bit and --> side of her.

reups 23:16, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

whoops reup 23:17, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front legs? 01:34, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Well tbh this matches burnts shading style on quiet rain so idk... also friendly reminder i have no computer access until the 27th 04:32, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

just because it works on one image doesnt mean itll work on all of them. 05:55, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Slate (ES) ~ For Approval
Probaby my favorite character from DotC. All colors from her other images. Comments? 13:28, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the texture more? It's much more blurred on her other ones 15:18, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:46, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the gradient of her eyes. They look multicoloured instead of amber. 04:33, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:23, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading a bit. she looks fierce :-) 02:56 Thu Oct 22

Reupload. I also lightened the shading to see if that helped. 03:13, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

There's a stray 1 px that isn't colored on the furthest back leg, I think ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:49, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload. 02:11, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 02:27, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

sorry but i feel the closest hind legs foot should have the shading defined, the stomach shading is too dark.needs some more blurring or whatever, the closest front leg could use its light defined, and the shading on the tail tip is too dark. 10:57, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:45, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (ES) - For Approval
I love Gray Wing I love Gray Wing I love Gray Wing. But I literally killed him with this. Thank you to Burnt for reserving this!!! Did I mention that I loved Gray Wing 16:04, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and possibly smudge the earpink more?

Re-uploaded: What even is this 21:23, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

could you darken the shading a little? 02:29 Wed Oct 21

reuploaded 11:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the far back leg? 15:20, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 20:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading 06:26, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you erase some of the shading on the tail? Beautiful~ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:30, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:48, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe it's my tired eyes, but I think there's some pesky shading waste hanging around the whole outline of the lineart. 21:14, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

it's there, i see it. blur the haunch shading a little more. 03:09 Fri Oct 23

Re-uploaded: Not sure if the changes are showing... 05:59, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the tail shading a bit.

re-uploaded: 21:10, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Gay Wing is sexy~ CBA? 02:28, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry >< but the shading is over blurred on the haunch and is leaking there as well, could you fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 09:20, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

the light on the front legs should be reversed to match the rest of the light source. 10:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I might just be going insane, but there seems to be a large amount of waste leaking from the right side of his head all the way down to his chest. -- 12:44, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: There's no waste... 17:09, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (ES) ~ For Approval
brb crying -- 16:09, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out/blur/whatever the stripes on her back. so beautiful. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 17:53, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on her head/face (if there is any). this is gorgeous! 20:05, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Did you get the file from me or TFG? If not, it's a good idea too - some of the areas are pale parts, rather than white. 20:46, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed areas of complaint (I hope, anyway). No, I did not get the file from anyone, but I mainly looked at Foxy's Loner and Queen, due to the similar poses. Looking at the legs, face, and tail on the Queen and Kit, they do seem to be a pale yellow. Would you like me to change that? -- 20:58, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

For your reference, the white + pale is at 100% on screen, with color #f9e7c3 for the pale. 21:11, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Oh no I wanted her DX oh well, would you like the file? 23:08, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed white parts to a cream color as needed, and also fiddled some with the shading. Thank you, Beebs!

I think I'm good now, Foxy, and I'm sorry I accidentally stole this from you. :( Thank you for the offer, though! -- 16:38, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

I wanted this too =P but you did a better job than I can ever. CBA?

Sorry, but the stripes could be thinned out, and the dorsal stripe could be thickened. I also think the stripes look slightly darker on her other images. 01:32, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth too? It looks a little flat ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:53, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

The dorsal stripe looks fine to me. 14:41, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined the eyes and thinned/darkened the stripes. -- 15:00, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

The white on the chest and paws look... Not white? could you brighten them up? 13:10, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could the edges of the tail stripes possibily be softened or smudged a tiny bit? They look a little sharp compared to her other images. I can see why she caught Clear Sky's eye - she's beautiful. 14:51, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Acorn Fur (ES) ~ For Approval
Colors from the kit. 20:50, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading 01:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Is that too light? 02:02, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on all the legs a bit? 19:27, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:24, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the facial shading? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:54, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups How's that? 13:26, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on her left front leg and curve the neck shading to go with the neck more. 10:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups completly redid shading, as I wasn't liking it. 13:07, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading near the tail/booty & the shoulder? 19:07, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Hawk Swoop (ES) ~ CBA
IT'S THE CIRCLE OF LIIIIFE 21:10, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

AAAND IT MOVES US ALLLLL Can you define the tail shading? 21:19, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up 21:33, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a few ticks, especially on the stomach and --> of the lovely Hawk Swoop. All hail the Queen.

re-up 20:33, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the head shading? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:56, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-up  09:58, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Pretty woman walking down the street 21:10, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (ES) ~ For Approval
23:54, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups just realized I forgot to smudge a few markings 23:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the markings some more please 00:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a tad? oh dang I want this but this is so beautiful 01:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reups Thanks Fox 09:58, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There should be thinner and a greater amount of stripes. I also think her patches are paler than this. 10:11, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

theyre not paler, theyre duller. 11:43, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

'reups I use highlights, that;'s why the color's brighter. I dulled them down a bit though. 15:35, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Can you shrink the amount of white from her belly. It doesnt go that far down on her other images 02:53, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:23, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the white paws? 13:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Indeed I can 17:50, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

This is hot. Blur the haunch shading a lil bit? 19:04, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Rainswept Flower (ES) - CBA
yay pretty cat with the pretty name 01:20 Wed Oct 21

That name suits you, Splook ;) Can you define light on the tail (I know it's shorthaired) and I think her stripes can be more smudged (just a little bit) and maybe just slightly thicker?

also make the lighter brown brighter, its a bit dull compared to the other images. 11:44, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded why thank ya brambley ;) 23:50 Thu Oct 22

Comments before approval? 14:39, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the stripes are less blurred on her other images. These seem a bit too...soft, for lack of a better word. Try sharpening them a little bit?

But she was just told to smudge them? 01:14, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. yeah i was 01:23 Sat Oct 24

Re-CBA? 13:13, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Holly (ES) ~ For Approval
I love this mademoiselle. 16:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Oops, a prickle wasn't filled in; I'll take care of that later. 16:05, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups there; I just realized that there's another unfilled pixel on her leg, which I'll fill on the next upload. 16:47, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I hope that's the last one and I added a few more prickles 21:11, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little? 22:31, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reups  21:08, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

stomach shading could be blurred some more. 10:59, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 14:44, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reed Tail (ES) ~ CBA
Ezüstkém ^^  I know shading looks bad,i will redo it next upload 20:07, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 12:21, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 02:28, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I'm so sorry for breaking the CBA :( but I really think the ear pink needs to be smudged a tad ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:41, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 11:31, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 13:12, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

One Eye (ES) - For Approval
Oh god, why did I make his pattern so ungodly hard, and why didn't I have separate layers for everything the first time? O.O I tried. I'll probably tweak the shading and bald patches on the next update. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:25, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge/whatever your prefrence the  little mark thingies above his head eyebrows a tad. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:33, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the bald patches blend in with the fur more? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:28, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think his bald patches need to blend in with the fur. 19:20, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

its not that they need to blend in, right now they look sorta like globs of....pink paint? sorry if it sounds offensive. 19:24, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Not at all, I totally see what you mean. ^^ I'll work on them. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:00, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah that's sort of what I meant. Sorry for the confusion ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:40, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Doestar (Star) ~ For Approval
I hope posting this follows the guidelines for PCA. This time I did Doestar, and I'm much happier with her. I tried to match the pattern of the leader version. I can't get that white to look right so if someone can help me with that, I'll be grateful ^^;. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 05:22, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more on her paws.So pretty^^ 11:09, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you so much! I smoothed the shading on her paws, and also fixed it on the chest and the main body. I'm glad you all like it ^^ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:27, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Wow, this is beautiful! Could you smooth out the shading a bit more on the tail and above the shoulder? 14:09, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Because you seem to know what you are doing, I'll promote you into an apprentice. As for this image, smooth out the shading on the ears, please. 01:36, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded These compliments really made my day! :D Thank you so much for promoting me into an apprentice <3 As requested, I smoothed out the shading on the shoulder, the tail, and the ears ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:41, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Aww this is so pretty! Blur the shading on her ears <3 02:06 Sat Oct 24

Reuploaded Thanks a ton! <3 I blurred the shading on her ears, hopefully it looks better to y'all. :) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:39, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (ES) ~ For Approval
Colours from the ancient. Now, I used a little highlights, just along the back and tail and a little around the left ear and face. I can remove it if she doesn't look black-furred, but I prefer to keep it. 22:22, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading somemore Gorgeouuss 22:28, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder/chest shading a tad. Lovely! 22:48 Thu Oct 22

Reupload Thanks! :) 23:11, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

The pupil size doesnt quite match in ==> that eye and its kinda bothering me. Thicken it by one pixel on > that side of it? 23:34, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Completely forgot to mention the design of the eye is based of Dapplepelt's image so credits to Shinxy for that. 00:10, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

theres lika a brighter streak on her back and tail. 09:48, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

realised its supposed to be highlights but they should be expanded so it doesnt look like a random streak. 10:53, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Her nose should be black; I think you forgot to fill it in. She looks really cute! 14:48, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (ES) - For Approval
I got told I could have the small amount of white, so I dunno. I can finally post this, jeez. Thank goodness.

So pretty c: could you maybe make the tail kinda fluffier? 04:28, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

It says her tail is short and stubby, (hence her name) so I don't want to really change that since I'm only following the description.

A few tufts on the tip of the tail wouldn't hurt. This is absolutely beautiful! =) damn though, her previous pattern was definitely pretty. Its a shame it had to be redone. 04:54, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

You do realize turtles don't have tufts of anything on their tails, right? I'm not trying to be stubborn, but since her tail is canonically said to be like a turtle's, and short and stubby, I don't see why the extra tufts of fur are necessary- it'll end up like the tail on the previous images, which aren't stubby. They were a frayed mess.

its fine. unless shes like really fluffy its probably not that tufty, and probably really short if its gonna be named after a turtle of all things. 05:20, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

I imagine people want it to be fluffy and thick at the base but come to a point is because turtle's tails tend to be pointed. Dunno though. This looks great! :D Define the shading on the face? Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:46, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Removed white and defined facial shading. And tbh unless she's called fluffy, I really don't think I need to change it. I also have all of the other images like this, and unless it says fluffy, then it should stay- I don't think I'd be getting told to make it fluffy had I used a short-haired blank.

Define the shading some more. 17:05, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Raven Pelt (ES) - For Approval
Sorry if his fur is a bit too light, I tried doing it darker and it just didn't look good to me. He has the same name as me I have an excuse. 21:59, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe use differnt highlights/tint then to make it look not so green? And perhaps darken it after that? --Dewsplash (talk) 22:01, October 23, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 22:01, October, 23, 2015

Well, it needs to match the rogue, so you'll need to darken it...

'''Reuploaded, I can't go much darker then this. 00:47, October 24, 2015 (UTC)'''

its still green. 09:41, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

and his nose should be black. 11:03, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (ES) ~ For Approval
butchered Breezy's pattern im so sorry 02:38, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

There is a little speck of waste above her head. Lovely! -- 12:37, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you! 13:04, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

there is waste beetween the front  legs. Belllastar (talk) 14:46, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ember (ES) ~ For Approval
09:42, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Jagged Peak (Alt ES) ~ For Approval
wow he's adorable. Belllastar (talk) 13:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Did you forget the earpink? lol. Thicken the shading on the main body; nice job! 14:11 Sat Oct 24

Define the light on the legs and tail. 14:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ya I did and I struggled with tail shading, but i will try again --Belllastar (talk) 14:19, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define overall shading. 14:46, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups what do you think of the crippled foot, and can somebody fix the link to his page Belllastar (talk) 15:32, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front legs/chest a little bit more. 18:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudspots (ES) ~ For Approval


diffine shadeing and in the other images the chest marking is shaped more like a triangle. Belllastar (talk) 16:47, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thunder (ES) - For Approval
bruh 17:27, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

this is HORRIBLE thunder would NOT BE proud. Lighten the shading on the back you dumdum 17:37, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

This is not horrible, its better then many of us could do! Make the nose a little pinker Belllastar (talk) 18:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)