Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 10

Squirrelflight (W) - Redone
My Ravenpaw image needs to be archived, so this isn't over the limit. Changes aren't showing. Original artist was Bramble, Shimmerpool, and tweaked by Moonflight. Her color was too bright. So I made her champagne colored, which is dark red. I don't like this, I think it either needs to be blurred somewhere or her shading is a little wonky (her chin shading) 19:13, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lightne her a tad, and brighten the highlights.(MUCH better, no offense to anyone.) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 19:18, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The pelt color or shading? I think I should lighten the shading, but just making sure what you mean :3 19:25, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading, her pelt color is fine. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:32, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It should be the second one in the history 19:40, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

This looks too red, I think you should just make it dark ginger, which is more like a red-brown color. 19:47, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

You are looking at the right one, right? This hasn't been showing, and I just want to make sure 19:49, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize the shading a bit more, and spread out the highlights. Looks good! 20:26, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, this is much better. Other from what Atelda says, I can find nothing wrong. Excellent job! 21:32, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Rainy, this is a sickly red color, not dark ginger. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:16, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I went back to square one. On the one that says color test, please lok at it and see if the color looks satisfying. It's much easier to recolor my image when it's not blurred or smudged. I will take care of everything else once the color is satisfactory. 23:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

That one looks better, just make it a little bit more ginger. :3 00:00, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Check the color now, it should be the second one, it's a little lighter than the others surrounding it 00:44, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Personaly, I liked the one you had up before, but I geuss the 2nd one is okay, just make the stripes on it a little less brown, and a bit more red-ginger, alright? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:14, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I liked it too, but a few people thought I needed to change it. I'll fix that and go ahead and add shading and stuff 03:28, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I rather like the color 21:07, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the white paw. 22:22, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the tail stripes match the rest of the stripes? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:58, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's all based off a realistic marbled pattern. I mean, I can. 23:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and tore her ear, as well, since I forgot to do that 02:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

The torn ear looks too round, make it more triangular. 21:39, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:36, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste inside her torn ear, get rid of that, and it should be ready, this is really pretty^^ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:38, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:43, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading in between her shoulder and haunch. 13:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:33, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the flank. This is looking really nice! Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 17:36, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Change upthe tail stripes. They dont really match the rest of the image. 15:43, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes aren't showing 15:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

48 hours without comment. Approved. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage |undefined 15:51, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (Q)~ Tweaked
Original artist was Icethroat. I blurred the shading, fixed the nose colour, and when i was adding dapples i kinda ruined the patches, so i blurred/smudged them and i know it doesnt match the other images, but they're already on the to be tweaked list. Comments? 20:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Changes arent showing. 20:37, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:04, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the tail. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:30, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded- 19:41, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patch on the head a bit to match her other patches. 22:05, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Not sure if the changes are showing. 19:19, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

48 hours without comment, Approved. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage |undefined 15:51, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Tweaked
Original artist was Mousetalon. Earpink needed to be consistent, and she needed darker shading. 02:58, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I've put the image into Photoshop and circled problems:

Green is where the thing that is circled with green (shading/highlights) needs to be blurred. Orange circle is lighten up shading a tad. And blue circles are where the lineart has become pale and you need to make it black again.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 09:01, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back and tail. The shading doesn't need to be lightened. And blur the earpink. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:06, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:53, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the middle shading, darken the tail shading, and blur the earpink more. 18:28, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:04, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the back. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:47, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I did, are you seeing the right one? 16:53, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. 19:17, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Then shouldn't the others' noses be gray? 00:13, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the nose is fine. Round the bottom of the highlight on the belly; the highlights look a bit flat. Define the ear-pink a bit more. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:35, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and by the way, I didn't do the highlights, the original artist did 20:05, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

48 hours without comment, Approved. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 15:51, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (E) ~ Tweaked (Redone)
Original artist was Sandy. I ended up re-doing the charart so the colors matches her SC charart. Changes aren't showing yet. Comments? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:50, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 18:23, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the graying muzzle slightly lighter or oranger to make it more natural looking. --Frosted Apple 19:29, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes still aren't showing up... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken ze shadin'. :3 15:19, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 17:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a little dark compared to her sharpclaw 03:03, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

They're supposed to be like that. I made her colors a bit duller than her SC colors because she would be older. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:35, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. 00:34, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't think the changes are showing up... -.- <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:32, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

48 hours without comment, Approved. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 15:51, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (W)~ Tweaked
Im not sure who the original artist was but Sandstar12 renamed it, and i had to add dapples. 19:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Smudge te patch on the tail a bit more, and it should be ready. 19:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Loos amazing! But blur it a tad, and make the ear=pink a touch more pink, really, we let it get approved with what looks like VIOLET ear-pink? No offense to the artist! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:28, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! Veery good job! And yes that ear ping can be a little lighter...but that fur is amazing! Leaf-storm,18:52,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Gonna be away from firday until late sunday, so sorry for a late reupload after this. 19:09, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

48 hours without comment, Approved. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 15:51, August 21, 2011 (UTC)