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Snowbird (K) - For Approval
First character ever!! (I'm so proud of myself) Echorunner (talk) 12:50, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, I did it for you. This is amazing! :) maybe blur the shading more? There needs to be nose pink as well. This is very good for your first charart The Fox Girl (talk) 12:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

If you are a kit, it should say "For evaluation" instead of "For Approval"- Anyway, please define the shading on the tail and the legs, but great work! :) Burntclaw (talk) 12:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think you can define it everywhere. 13:00 Fri Nov 28

Plus, this should be called File:Snowbird.kit.png. I also fixed the thumbnail. 13:06 Fri Nov 28

Thanks! I'll remember next time!!!!

Remember to sign your posts with four "~"s, also, when ever you re-upload something, remember to notify us by writing something like Re-ups. XD Btw add shading to the legs plz. If you need help with the placement of the shading you can look at the apprentice tutorials. Also, the file is still not named correctly. Burntclaw (talk) 14:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

To rename it, just rename it in the next upload The Fox Girl (talk) 14:26, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, it makes less work for admins (maybe) if you wait and have an admin rename it for you. 14:54, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please, it's much easier to just let me rename it. Which I just have. I'm also gonna change the heading to "For Approval" since I think this is good for an apprentice-rank promotion tbh.

Along with defining the shading on the legs and tail, maybe add another layer of shading on top of the existing one at a lower opacity ro create some depth? 21:07, 11/28/2014

Blur the earpink a bit? The Fox Girl (talk) 07:12, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It looks plenty blurred enough to me. 21:36, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink, actually? 03:47, 11/30/2014

Sharpen the shading a bit, it looks flat. Burntclaw (talk) 00:15, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Just a friendly reminder: please remember to re-upload your image by Friday(Dec. 5th) or it may be declined. Since when you don't upload for seven days it is considered lack of work. (Yes I know this is a leads' job, but nobody had said anything so...please don't be mad at me). 19:26, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

She actually did, she just forgot to reup Burntclaw (talk) 02:45, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs, also define the shading on the tail. The Fox Girl (talk) 05:02, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Well I'm now just seeing changes so I don't believe she already did before I posted that message. Unless wikia is broken again. But if forgetting to say reup is the case, she could still get her image declined if we don't know what we're looking at. That's just the way the boat floats, and I'm just trying to warn her ahead of time before she has to experience that. Back to the image, define the facial shading and define the depth of the body shading. This is looking really good! 14:07, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, please. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:12, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

The white is looking a tad bit gray, maybe give the shading a dark blue tint to help it? I know tint isn't required but it would help. 00:37, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Echorunner, please remember to say "Re-uploaded" or "Re-ups" so we know you've uploaded a new version of your image. Thank you. 13:46, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

This was last reuploaded on the 7th, as shown by the file history. It doesn't take much of anything to look at the history and see, honestly. Just to be sure, you're still working, right, Echorunner? I haven't seen you comment on this section in a while, so I just want to double-check.

Oh, i forgot about this! My computer wasn't letting me comment on a lot of stuff on wiki and youtube... thats why and yes, i am still working on it (and my practice characters)--Echorunner (talk) 00:37, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define light on the tail. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:38, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. Brick  The Bite of '87  09:11, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldnt the shading on the tail stretch to its base? Also, blur the shading a bit more please.-- 03:40, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

It doesn't always have to, Breeze. I sometimes only shade the tip if the shading likes to screw with a certain pattern and/or color. Especially since the tails are so small -.- lmao. 18:10, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

There's absolutely no indication in this section that you've been working on this image, Echorunner. Please remember to comment here when you reupload to let us know that you've done so. If you don't, we're not gonna know without looking in the file history as to what you've done.

Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Dull and blur the highlights, please.-- 00:45, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:51, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing. 19:21, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

They're showing for me. I don't know what the problem is, if it's on your end or what... 17:27, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Ashheart (Ki) - CBA
Tried Jayie's shading. All colors from the warrior image, which I'm the OA of. Comments? 21:57, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the chest? 22:22, 12/1/2014

Reuploaded. 22:33, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source and blur the shading a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the light source just fine, though I'll change it if others agree. As for the blurring, I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur or smudge her shading. 00:53, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading above the hind leg could be defined more 05:32, 12/2/2014

Reuploaded. Changes |here. I'll fix the waste next. 21:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on this <-- front paw. 03:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:35, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I honestly cannot tell where the light is coming from on this source. The head tells me it's coming from straight above, the chest tell me it's coming from the left, and the legs and side tell me it's coming from the right. 13:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to change the shading again unless it's either absolutely necessary or involves dulling the highlights. 13:33, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs and blur it everywhere else. 03:46, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just defined the shading, as I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur her shading. 16:06, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth out the shading somehow? I know it seems silly, but this looks a bit too abrupt, for lack of a better word? I'm sorry, I'm mobile and can't fully explain what I mean.

Reuploaded. I redid the whole shading. 21:12, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

define the face shading and maybe blur the right side chest shading, lookin good. 00:30, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 01:59, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth the shading out a little more? Maybe blur it or something, idk. 17:40, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:02, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more, please?

Okay so I did that on mobile yesterday and it totally didn't go where it was supposed to. =/

Ok, by that, do you mean the comment was supposed to go on a different image, or what? Sorry, I'm just confused. 21:49, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, I was in a hurry when I typed that. It was meant to go on this image, but it just went above a different comment, despite me being at the right part of the page...aka I really shouldn't edit from my phone.

Reuploaded. Redid the shading again. 22:21, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a bit. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:04, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:08, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail please. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:23, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:49, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry for the lack of comments, Blue. ^^ CBA?

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
omg don't kill me for ruining Sparrow's images please 18:30 Tue Dec 9

Thin out the pale chest and define the shadin. This looks nice! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest edges into the fur more. He looks amazing, you did a fine job, Amber! 00:42, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the ear pink more. You made him purrty :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:51, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

the pale part on his face should only go up to his nose. 04:29, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks everybody ^-^ 18:03 Wed Dec 10

Define shading. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is dark enough. In fact, I think it could be lightened up a tad. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:31, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

It needs to be defined, defining doesn't just mean darkening. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:33, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a bit? I can't see the pattern through the shading. Nice job Amber. ^^ 01:52, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Just saw that Fox said that already. ^^ 01:58, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

Oops, forgot to reup ^^ 12:55 Mon Dec 15

Thin out the pale chest, also lighten it up to match his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 14:00, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up his shading, I can't see his pattern through it at all.-- 00:35, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Also, he needs a collar since he was a kittypet back then. Am I right? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:20, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

You would be correct, Fox. ^^ If they were kittypets when they were kits, then they should get the kittypet collar unless otherwise stated.

Reupssssssssss 17:35 Fri Dec 19

Lighten the shading on the left side of his body. So cute :3 (I like the collar) 17:46, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the collar lineart on this -> side of the body? 18:35, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki)~ For Approval
Woo~  First white cat (I really hope I did this right I don't wanna redo another charart :/) 11:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define ur light source. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:48, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up, too. It's making the white look pretty gray. 13:41, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

She's not supposed to be white. She should be a light color, hence why she looks off-white. The base from the kittypet is #E3E5E2. I'm also gonna rename this for you, since it should be File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png.

Should I change the pelt color then and reup? 11:17, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I suggest you to color pick off the apprentice image and just change the base color. The Fox Girl (talk) 13:18, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks hard edged, maybe blur it more? Then define it everywhere. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Meh that would put her back to where she is now. Just blur the edge of the shading dear, that should fix it up and save you a lot of stress. But define the depth just a tad, like darken it where the creases are and where there would be less light. You're doing wonderfully~ 02:33, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. The left paw and main body is telling me its coming from the <--- while the right paw and tail are telling me it's coming from --->. The head could use a little bit of shading, aswell. Perhaps just switch aroound the foreleg shading; or switch the tail or main body shading. 00:34, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Sorry I haven't been uploading recently. School, the upcoming holiday, bleh.. 14:09, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey, just as a head's up, don't align the images. It messes up the sections if too many are done at the same time. Define the light just a bit on <-- front leg.

Reups Gah sorry I must've not been paying attention 14:29, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Try adding some highlights or something- she's looking a bit on the grey side. This is very nice for a first white cat, though. ^^ 03:14 Fri Dec 19

Nevermind, I didn't see that she's supposed to be light-coloured, not white. Anyways, maybe define the shading just a little?

Reups Sorry about the confusion lol 14:42, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and chest shading a bit. ^^ 19:14, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, tbh. I can see them both clearly. Can you blur the shading a tad more, please?-- 06:11, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
here we go again. 21:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Again, remove the patchy fur. That cite is from Sign of the Moon, which is long after he was a kit. Given that he's also a kit, I don't think he'd have any of the mud either- kits aren't allowed outside of the cave. I'm also renaming this to File:Stoneteller_(NP).kit.png, =P

I thought she's not allowed to repost the same image for a whole week?? That happened with me and Dawnpelt and I was told I couldn't re-reserve & repost until a week had past. Wouldn't the same go for this? Sorry if I'm wrong or missed something. 02:36, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

I said that with you because you had done it mutiple times already and disregarded me quite a few times when we told you why. You've not only done that with Dawnpelt, but a few others as well. Breeze has only done this once, therefore she should only get the declined image.

Um I've never disregarded anybody here. And I honestly don't remember any of those situations you are referring to. But regardless of any of that, it says in the rules and regulations at the top that if your image is declined you must wait a week before reclaiming your image, so it gives other users a chance to work on it. I thought we go by the rules here, not past mistakes which I'm truly sorry for. I was young and stupid, and I can say proudly I've matured and do not act like that anymore. 03:45, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

It says at the top of the page the following: This is to prevent users who've had images for longer than one month to pass it on to another artist. There is nothing about one week. I would know- I'm the one that added that because we had so many people trying to keep the image. Regardless, you haven't done that in a while, and I think you might need to recheck the top of the page again, because there's nothing about one week- only the two week one for people who've had images for a month.
 * If your image has been declined due to the one month limit, you must wait two weeks to reclaim your image. This gives other users the chance to work on it if they wish.

Also, I did what I did with you with permission from the leader of the project, since it was clear you were not going to abide by the rules back then. There is nothing at the top of the page as of current that says what you claim it does. It's an unwritten rule going off the "your image is yours until it is archived". I extended it to try and get you to see what you had done wrong. It worked, and I'm glad to see that.

agreeing with skye here. breezey hasn't done this before, i do not think? (it is 10 at night, forgive me-) 03:56, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Oh I understand now. Thanks for clarifying and I guess you're right I don't see it there. I guess it did work lol thanks for teaching me that; it saved a lot of headaches. Okay sorry for interrupting!! Carry on~ 03:59, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:58, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and legs a bit.

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink- this looks much darker than what's on his Healer image, and I can't see it at all.

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 05:21, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Jessy (Ki) ~ For Approval
I really meant for this to be up earlier whoops 18:43, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Make the collar larger, as it'd be pretty big on a kit. This is pretty! 22:46, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

The size itself is fine. Given that there are some pretty thin collars out there, they'd still appear "normal" sized on a kit. It's clear that this collar is too big for Millie because of how it's positioned. If it were too small, then it would probably be moved. This is also the lineart from my version of Millie's kit, and I was told that the size itself was okay to use.

The collar is fine. Define the shading on the left foreleg, please. 00:31, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:56, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on her right side is a bit dark compared to her front legs' shading, maybe lighten it up a bit? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:19, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading over there is fine, but I think the shading on the front legs could be defined, as I can't see it too well. 14:38, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lily (Ki) ~ For Approval
my rabbit's name is Lily, too 19:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the brown just a bit? The face is really bright on the kittypet compared to the rest of her body.

Reups 19:21, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the face brown too? That looks a different color than the rest, and I'm pretty sure that's just one big highlight on her KP. It's such an old image wow

Make the collar larger since itd be pretty big on a kit. You did a lovely job! 22:47, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a touch. 2:25 Sun Dec 14 2014

Reups 21:08, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on the face? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:49, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I see it fine, and I'd much rather not. 15:09, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Can you thin out the lineart on --> side of the collar? It seems really thick.

Reups 16:04, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Ki) - CBA
he may be trash but his kit form is a precious cinnamon roll, too good for this world, too pure 23:52, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Just blur/smudge the stripes a tiny tad? All of it except the muzzle. Also, define the shading a bit? --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:59, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 14:01, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on his side just a tiny bit, i can't see his pattern through it at all. 03:33, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

If I lighten it up it's goin to be the same away as before so i think it's fine 20:52, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'm kinda having issues seeing the pattern myself, though. I think maybe no more than like 5%-10% (if that) on the opacity bar would do the trick.

re-up 01:55, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit? I can hardly see it. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:26, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

it's colorpicked from his other images so i think it's alright- 20:33, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the neck shading, if there is any? I can't tell.

re-up 20:13, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Tiny kitty cute kitty too bad he turns evil. CBA?

Slate (Ki) - CBA
23:04, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Cute! Maybe define the shading a bit? Also, would you like the file? 00:25, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

I think kits shouldn't have scars, right? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:25, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Um kits can have scars. It's not impossible; not all kits spend there time in the safe walls of a nursery. Most rogues are out hunting when they're kits. And plus you can remember all Cloudtail's adventures and you can see why they can get scars. Plus I've seen them with scars, it's not a pretty thing.

But we have no idea when this fox incident with the brother happened, right? So it could've happened anytime in Slate's life. Perhaps we keep the scar, in case it happened when they'd been kits? I'm not sure if anyone has a direct contact with one or more of the Erin's but if you do, maybe you could ask? I don't know, I hate to assume so I'd rather have someone find out. 13:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I'm going to keep it purely because we don't know when she got it, and it would seem to be an assumption to not have it. And I think I can manage without the file, but thanks for the offer. I'll reupload it later. 13:25, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 22:58, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Will I get shot for asking you to define the neck shading a tiny bit?

there isnt actuay any neck shading there's just the chin shading and the head shading. 21:56, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Fair enough. CBA?

Dustpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
Ok, I don't know if chararts can be done in a day, but anyway, this is my first charart! I used PAINT.NET for this one. He's so cute! How can I improve? This is my first charart, so I may not be familiar with everything. BTW, how to make background color disapperar? I had trouble with that. Hope this helps! FireTail101 (talk) 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sign your posts with four tides plz. To remove the background, select the linear art, copy it, paste it onto ur base color layer, then use the magic wand tool and delete the background with control+x. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 23:58, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Plz match his other images by adding stripes as well. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups

The stripes are already there, just dark. U probably couldn't see them because of background. FireTail101 (talk) 00:13, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color and define the shading. Not bad for ur first charart! If You had seen my first charart, you'd laugh your head off. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:17, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Colour pick from one of the other Dustpelt images. Just be careful not to colour pick a shaded spot. Also with PAINT.NET, I leave the layers and save as a .pdn, then save again as a .png and that will make it one layer, making it easier to edit the waste. I leave the .pdn as multiple layers so I can edit it easier. This is great for first try! --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Stealthfire, I colourpicked each color from Dustpelt's apprentice image. FireTail101 (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I still think it's a bit dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

He's way to dark. He looks like a black cat on my screen, tbh. You can use  this to colorpick from; Because right now, he's so dark to the point i cant even see his stripes or lineart.

Use the medium brown on the bottom left as your base; while using the paler brown beside it for his pale parts. The pink is for his ears; and the orange/yellow in the middle is for his eyes. The darkest brown is for his stripes. Also, his nose needs to be black/dark brown to match his other images. 00:30, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups FireTail101 (talk) 02:08, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define/darken the stripes? I really can't see them. You're doing well! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Sure. FireTail101 (talk) 16:57, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base coat a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:23, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Redstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
Well this turned out alright..I'm hoping I can get in one last image before I take off on my vacation, so let's do this! Comment away~ 03:07, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add another stripe or two to the shoulder/top of the arm? (this is what i mean) You don't have to, though. This is just a preference. ^^' 03:31, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah I'll do that in the morning. I almost added a stripe there but I wasn't sure if I should. But looking at it now its kind of weird to just have it blank. 04:23, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:40, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on --> front leg and on the tail.

Re-uploaded. 14:28, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Cherrytail (K) ~ For Approval
Cherrytail is my babe, comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:18, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the chest white more. You did a great job! She's pretty =) 18:11, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Oh and I also see some waste next to the neck over ---> on this side. 20:43, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thank you! Question: Does she need a collar? Since she was a kittypet back then. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:07, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

You're welcome. And yes she would. 04:44, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Collars are evil XD By the way, I already got 4 images approved... When will I become a warrior? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:41, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Now, honestly. I couldn't figure out how many images you had approved, hence why I didn't promote you. I didn't realize you had a charart page, my apologies on the delayed promotion. ;-;

Okay let's comment on this... hmm, could you smudge the patches a bit? They appear smudged on her other images, but with this, I really can't tell because the blanks are so damn tiny.

Re-ups I smudged them as much as I can, and I rather not smudge them any further. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:18, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Falling Feather (Ki) ~ For Approval
Hm. <span style="">22:31 Wed Dec 17

Smooth out the texture to match the other images? This is purrty! ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:30, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I did exactly what I did to this image what I did on the StarClanner, so I personally think it's fine. <span style="">21:47 Thu Dec 18

Bess (Ki) ~ For Approval
hello naughty children it's darkness time. <span style="">03:17 Fri Dec 19

Brilliant! Define light on the tail? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but I couldn't do much without making the colour look funny. Also messed around with the white a tad because it was bugging me. <span style="">14:03 Fri Dec 19

Smudge the chest white a tad more. Hi Berry, welcome back! =) 14:31, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also adjusted the front paw shading a bit because it was bugging me. <span style="">14:27 Sat Dec 20

The shading is really dark on his right paw. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:21, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

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pls tell me I'm done with this set now 13:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading overall, then smooth it out. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 13:49, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think just smoothing it out would solve the problem. It doesn't distort the pattern in any way, shape, or form, and I can see it just fine.

I think it could be lightened just a shade over on the farthest side to our right ---> because I think it messes with the color a tad, and I can't really see the pattern through it. The rest is fine. I think this is the last one in the set Shinx lol 14:34, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

This computer makes shading appear so daaaarrrkk I'm glad my guess was almost ok 15:11, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Could u possibly smooth out the tail shading? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:22, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

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The kits taking over the world so here's a StarClanner :3 20:33, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

On the tail too. This is pretty! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)