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Oakfur (R) ~ For Approval
guess who's back from hiatus hell 14:59 Sun Jan 29

Define the shading/light source. 19:41 Sun Jan 29

re-ups 20:58 Sun Jan 29

I feel like the shading should go up higher along the edge of the hip. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:58, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

re-ups 00:27 Wed Feb 1

Could you give a bit of shape to the shading? Right now it just seems like there's a whole bunch of light on the top part of the cat... unless that was intentional. Which, if it was, disregard my message.

Yeah, that was intentional on my part. 16:17 Sun Feb 5

I think the shading should still go up higher along the edge of the hip. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:48, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

re-ups 00:25 Wed Feb 8

Rileypool (W) - For Approval
Ehhhhh...I may mess around with the stripe placement later. :/ 17:25, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

On the other images, the black doesn't curve around the ear, but is only on the tip part, and the earpink is a tiny bit brighter. :) 17:47, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ^^ 17:52, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

I think the tail stripes should be a bit more jagged on the edges, like the other images

Reups 20:30, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes a little (except on the tail that's good)Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  09:04, February 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 17:56, February 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink; I can't even tell it's there.

Reups 17:00, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Do you want the file for his apprentice? The colors are slightly off. 17:20, 2/05/2017

Also theres only supposed to be one gray ear, not both 17:22, 2/05/2017

I think I'm okay for now, but thank you for the offer, Winter. Maybe if I become desperate enough! I'll fix this once I'm done with my classes. 15:48, February 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Changed the color of the base and stripes a bit. 02:58, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Rippletail (SC) (Ro) ~ For Approval
First rogue...comments?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:02, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Lighten the shading a lot. Also, rememeber to have a heading, and don't align your images! .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:07, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart

Smooth out the shading. Also there's leaking shading throughout the image. 00:12, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

There isn't any color in the nose hole. Also, should the file be named "Rippletail (SC).rogue.png" ? 00:17, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste spots around the image; near the back of the paws and a spot above the back. 00:24, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Changed the heading to evaluation, again. I think this is still your first image... 00:39, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. This isn't my first image, but the other one didn't get approved'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:52, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

The alignments must be taken off. Someone has already said this. Also, there is still waste around the image, and between the tail and back leg. The shading is leaking away along the ears and tail, and all shading should be lightened. Nose color is still not there. :) 00:55, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out shading. Shadowbright67 (talk) 01:19, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading;; looks too dark for a white cat, and makes it seem like a dark gray/white cat

Re-uploaded❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:21, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

For the third time, do not align your images. :/ I took them off. 02:39, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry to nag you, but you still need to lighten the shading. Try changing the opacity. Also, there's waste by the front paw closest to us. 02:46, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! I also fixed the darkness :3'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 04:22, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Re-uploaded after I quickly noticed some waste above the tail-tip❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 04:28, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

You need to lighten the shading a lot. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:49, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! This is about how much I can lighten it before it gets a bit too light, I'm pretty sure'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 18:11, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

No, I think it wouldn't hurt if you lightened the shading a bit more and smoothed it out as well. 21:24, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! Apple's at it again'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 21:49, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Perhaps remove some of the shading on the <-- side of the --> back leg, since your light source wouldn't have very much there

blur the shading a lot more 00:40, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! Hopefully it doesn't look so choppy'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:43, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

The nose pink is too neon compared to the kit's. And shouldn't this file be named Rippletail_(SC).rogue.png instead? 01:03, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! I tried to rename it, but it always crashes. I'll figure something out later.'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 01:26, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

'''Re-uploaded! Blurred the shading!'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 12:57, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

waste behind the front legs 01:13, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! Got rid of other waste too :X'''❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 01:24, February 2, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

The nose pink on the kit image is a light pink. 17:57, February 3, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! I lost access to my other account AppleBreeze, and had this one. If I get in trouble, what is there to lose? Nobody helped me..'''BrokenFoot 19:53, February 3, 2017 (UTC)BrokenFoot

Define the earpink a tiny bit, also, you can still recede some of the shading on the <--- side of the back leg closest to us, for the light source you are using. 06:26, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like you could recede away some of the shadow on the right side of the front legs, it's extending a lot onto the belly. The shading looks like it's outlining the shoulder and hips a lot, but it's cutting into the belly, which should be lit more since the belly is rounded, if that makes sense. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:51, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  07:52, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Curlypaw (A) ~ For Approval
First appie! ^^ Curlypaw. . .so. . .enthusiastic. :/ .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:04, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

The eye on the other image, mine, are much darker. 00:16, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups   .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:25, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Where is your light source? Can you please define it? It's hard to tell where your light source is with the shading on the legs. And I think there should be at least some light on the neck and back. 00:31, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:45, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge / smoothen shading a bit. Shadowbright67 (talk) 01:17, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Reups  .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 19:23, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck/chest and the front shoulder. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:52, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Echomist (Star) ~ For Evaluation
So. . .I read the guidelines... I hope i did all this right. Ripplewave123 (talk) 01:44, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the eyes and define shading on the face :} 01:50, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the back..not sure what happened there❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:25, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

I don't think the base colour matches? It looks a bit cream to me? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:50, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more. Also, where is your light source? If it's from below, I feel like the top of the tail-tip, the top of the head, and above the forelegs should be shaded inside of the underise. If from above, then the bottom of the back should be shaded, not the top. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:56, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Ripplewave123 (talk) 02:53, February 3, 2017 (UTC)  Reups

Blur/smudge the shading more, especially on the back, and try to give the eyes more depth. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 03:03, February 3, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like with your light source coming from the bottom right, the shading on the front legs should be on the other side of the legs, if that makes any sense? Unless I am mistaken. 18:00, February 3, 2017 (UTC)

You need to darken the eye depth..😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 09:39, February 4, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Still working?Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  07:11, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Stonewing (Ro) - For Approval
Here's my second. :] 23:59, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Define the shading on the fank and maybe smooth it out a bit?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:00, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Blur/smudge the shading 00:25, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

​Reuploaded 02:40, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more. 00:22, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:57, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Gonna sound like a broken record, but you'll still need to smooth out the shading a fair bit more.

Reuploaded 18:36, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading (or light, whatever works) on the tail. 00:31, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''​Thanks for the advice, David. I defined the light. 00:59, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Wrenflight (Star) ~ For Approval
took way too long 02:57, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Nice texture! It looks like there's black at the edge of her eye-to the left or whatever-and I think it could be lightened❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 03:01, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

That's eye depth, Apple. Anyways, smoothen out the shading on the chest, this (-->) side. :) 03:14, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

I realized :/ Blur the texture a tiny bit❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 13:31, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Reuploaded  23:01, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the texture just a tiny bit? The lines don't seem to be nearly as sharp on her other two images. 00:21, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:11, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's me or not, but smooth out the shading?BrokenFoot 19:59, February 3, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded I think it's fine, but... 01:50, February 4, 2017 (UTC)

Could be smoothed out a fair bit more; remember, it should be more gradient-like, but this, for lack of a better phrase, cuts off.

Reuploaded 20:21, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think it could be lightened a little, the darkness doesn't look quite right as it is. and the shading on the head could curve with the head itself a bit more. 00:31, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:32, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Slatepaw (A) ~ For Approval
Quite a while to get the shading right, but I am still not confident about it. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:37, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the shading at all, darken it. Also define the eye depth.❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 22:49, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Define the texture. At first, I couldn't tell tell that it had texture at all. 23:06, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tell me if it is still difficult to spot the shading / texture, becausee I can't set my laptop to the right amount of brightness and darkness. Shadowbright67 (talk) 07:44, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more, I still can't really see it. 13:32, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink a bit :) 02:14, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think part of the head is warped? their right ear looks odd. 00:29, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Realized the navigator showed exactly what it would look like not from my laptop, and I thought I already showed the updated version. Also, I'm not too sure about the ear. Shadowbright67 (talk) 02:10, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and smooth the shading on the legs/paws. 23:50, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Night (HJ) ~ For Evaluation
brb Wolflovershowl (talk) 23:09, February 3, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste below the right paw and define the shading on the same arm. Good job.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 23:38, February 3, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Redone 23:48, February 3, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the ---> front leg :) 06:22, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 14:26, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the eye depth a little?

The shading on the front leg still looks very sharp, smoothen it out a bit more. C: 18:42, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 18:48, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading on the head and neck a bit. 00:29, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the ---> front paw a bit, especially on the lower half of the leg. 17:26, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Softwing (Star) - For Approval
Eh 20:21, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but the pupil in the left (ours) eye looks like its crooked, and kinda making the cat look cross-eyed? I think it's the difference in the pupil length. Maybe shift the left one over and lengthen it, or reduce the pupil size in the right? Idk, I may just the wrong, someone can decide. {: 02:17, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried shortening the pupil in the right eye. Did that help at all? 02:27, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Snowbird (Ro) - For Approval
oh god i haven't done a rogue or a white kitty in a long time... 03:06, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the tail and leg shading a little? 00:28, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:30, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Parsleyseed (KP) ~ For Approval
probably don't match at all but (shrug emoji) 00:26, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

The nose color is a dark brown/black on the other two images. :D Also, the base color looks a bit different...is it just me? 01:16, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

the warrior's nose is never coloured in and on the apprentice it's similar to the ears, you may have to zoom in to see. I'll do something about the base colour issue soon. 01:28, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 05:52, February 9, 2017 (UTC

It looks great to me, but I can send you the file if you want. The only thing I'd say is, maybe make the markings a bit thicker. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 18:40, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded tried, if it sucks I'll fix it later when i'm far more conscious (thnx for the files) 21:26, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Drizzlepaw (A) - For Approval
Wow, shading this was annoying.

Smoothen out the shading by the haunches/tail and upper leg area? :D 22:52, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Star (CG) ~ For Approval
I never thought I'd get to try one of these ~

Crop the image. There's way too much extra space on <- side of the image.

Reuploaded

Flower (Lo) (KP) ~ For Approval
Based on my Aunt Kathy's old cat, Maia. Comments? 13:28, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

I love this pattern. Mind adding some more depth to the shading? Especially on the hip, tail and leg. 17:15, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you dull the orange just a bit? 21:19, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the ear-pink (If it's fine, just ignore me) ErmineGlow (talk) 23:20, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:41, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (NP) (app) - for approval
I hate shading gray and white... <span style="">14:08 Fri Feb 10

Okay wow, it took me way too long to figure out this wasn't an apprentice image for Thistleclaw. XD I read the name wrong, and it looked like his pattern and spiky fur. Anyway, darken the shading, especially on the lower half of the cat and the tail? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 18:42, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Plumclaw (Q) ~ For Evaluation
My first pixel

Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 16:22, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think this needs a date and reservation on the chart

Wolfstep (Star) - For Approval
Precious boy — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:27, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the white, especially on the paws. 01:29, February 11, 2017 (UTC)