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Velvet ~ Silver Nomination
I added quotes, and expanded the article, comments? 16:41, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Article looks great! I'm really sure it can't be expanded, but just check to make sure. ;) For some weird reason, the references for the quotes are kind of weird... I'll fix it. Also, the last sentence in the main quote:I gave you are daughter, remember? seems kind of odd. Can you check that sentence in the book, please? 19:14, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

LOL, SquirrelFlame, you're right. ;) My best guess is that "are" was meant to be "our." But I'm not sure, so I'm not going to fix it. Atelda, this looks great! Only in the main quote's caption, I don't think there should be a period after "Red" or the word "in" before SkyClan's Destiny. None of the other quotes are quite like that. I also think you should get rid of the period after the word "do" in the second quote down in the quotes section. Also, in the last sentence of the last paragraph of her SkyClan's destiny section, I think "their" should be "they're." Everything else looks fantastic to me. :) 21:21, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wow, today must be off. Anyways, I checked through the book and she's not mentioned again. And quotes and silly spelling errors on my part have been fixed. 22:06, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I got a few grammar mistakes here and there and it looks good to me. 22:40, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Same here. 18:57, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lawl, thanks! So...comments? 18:58, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! 16:58, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add in some links in the summary, other then that it looks great! :D 01:04, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Meh, there wasn't much to link, but done! xD 01:48, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

On the CBV list, then! 17:21, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

In the third paragraph of the history there's this sentence: "She points out that Red knows where she is, and if she wants to talk." It doesn't make sense to me so you might want to clear that up. 21:11, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Cleared. 04:55, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Whitethroat ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 23:06, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Find a reference for the amber eyes part of the description. 00:07, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand A Dangerous Path and add some more quotes? 01:32, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

The last quote should either be deleted since it hardly says anything, or have a description showing why it is so important. 22:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, deleted the amber eyes part in the description, I expanded each section too, and replaced the last quote. I can add one more quote, but I don't think it's nessecary as it doesn't tell much about his personality if at all. 01:51, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

What's the last quote you found? I trust your judgement, but I just want to see for myself. :P 03:41, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Either, "W-Whitethroat and I came here h-hoping you'd give us food and healing herbs," and then I found this one, "Then he realized that Brokentail had forced these cats into apprenticeships when they were barely old enough to leave their mothers' sides. Banishing their cruel leader must have come as such a relief that what had happened to him afterward paled into insignificance." I found the second one while looking for the first and I'm actual leaning towards the second one as it basically needs a description to match. 03:52, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I like the second one more. Add in in and we'll see how it looks. 22:16, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done ;) 22:45, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

There were a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes, but I think I got most of them. 17:35, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

So...comments? 01:49, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. 18:22, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nutmeg (KP) - Silver Nomination
Since we are not affiliated with PCA, this article is ready PC-wise. I have one more quote to add, and she'll be all set. 00:36, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. I fixed the quote it has - considering that not every letter needs to be capitalized. Good job! :) 00:40, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lightningpaw ~ Silver Nomination
So, he only appears in CP, and I've expanded that section as much as possible, and the one and only quote related to him doesn't relate to him. Comments? 17:19, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I'll add the quote. 17:22, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It says "he give him the gift..." I'll fix it. And can you explain more when Crookedstar feels that the world is huge? I don't know, the phrasing feels kind of strange there. 17:27, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I took the phrasing off the book, so it should be fine. 17:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Could you flesh it out a bit more using more words? 21:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

What I meant was in the last sentence, "He gives him the life of humility, and Crookedstar feels that the world is huge and that RiverClan is only a tiny speck in the whole world," you used the word "and" twice so it seems kind of weird there. 22:30, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It is possible to use a word twice in a sentence, you know. I'll change it anyway to make you feel better. ;P 16:54, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 18:27, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

I feel better now. XD 19:20, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, on the CBV list. 16:45, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hattie ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 17:58, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the last sentence of FQ. 18:10, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand TDH? 21:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's important to expand, but the last sentence in The Darkest hour deosn't seem to relate to Hattie very much, so I think it's ok to delete it. Also, I got quite a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but I think that's all. 22:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Atelda, are you still working on this? It's been 10 days without any comments. 22:31, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

The Super Edition Section needs to be before the original series. ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:36, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mhmm, just waiting to get it from the library, on hold still :/ 04:56, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Mossleaf ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 18:07, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe flesh it out, using a bit more words? 21:50, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

What Icestorm said. XD Other than that, he's a very minor character, so I don't see anything else you cna do. 01:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can't expand much, really, since he's so minor. 16:49, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, then! 02:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish ~ Silver Nomination
I think she's ready, but I think we could try to find some more qoutes if possible. I think the history is expanded as much as it could, seeing as she doesn't even have a description. Oh and sorry about the big link, it wouldn't let me "tag" it. Comments? 23:17, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I linked it for you ;3 Possibly flesh out the first paragraph of Crookedstar's Promise, make it a bit more detailed. 23:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded it alot, and got to quotes, taking out the main quote and putting in a different one. I detailed it with saying stuff like "Her eyes glitterd nervously" How does it look now? 15:58, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find another quote? It would be nice, but if you can't find one, don't worry about it. Also, you're not supposed to use direct quotes in the history, so in paragraph three of the history, I suggest you rephrase that. 19:31, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks SquirrelFlame, I think I can find 1 more quote :) 19:39, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Added another quote, so how does it look now? 00:42, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great, but the last quote doesn't really show her personality. Maybe you should use the one quote she says in the CP manga? 16:55, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Your quotes have too many quote marks. I'll go fix that. 19:49, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

@Mistystar I put the manga qoute in!

@SquirrelFlame Thanks :P Ok, so anything else? 01:06, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Remember to sign with four tides. Her page looks great! Good job Sweetflower! 15:51, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add a reference for the trivia. 17:25, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I never put that in, Shellheart did. So I'll try to find the reference. 01:06, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart put in the reference I think, so how is it now? 00:42, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

The last sentence: "Same with her kits, littermate, and mate," isn't a complete sentence. Change it or combine it so that it is. 18:20, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I re-worded it, what do you think? 02:11, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I would rather have it combined. Both sentences end with the same words, so I think you should combine it. 17:34, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I will than 19:43, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, done that! So anything else? 17:25, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Should the article be written in simple present tense or present continuous tense? I fixed the article so it would stick to simple present. Also, in the third paragraph, it says Sunfish darts out of the den and everything, but at the end of the paragraph, it says that Sunfish got her warrior name then, even though Sunfish got her warrior name before that. 23:55, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I put her sentence about getting her name, and put it ahead. So is it good? 16:35, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I reworded some of the things in her article, because it didn't flow well. It would be hard to explain it so I just did it for you, ok? 16:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

In the third paragraph, it says Sunfish wonders why they are hunting, but Hailstar responds answering what they are hunting. Either "why" has to be changed to "what" or someone else says why they are hunting and you didn't add it in yet. 18:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy thanks @SquirrelFlame I put something in a bout the river, so it makes sense not to change it. 15:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can the Warriors App be expanded? I think I remember something about Sunfish being the only one Leopardfur confided in, but I can't remember. 17:30, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Trust me, I would love to, but I don't have an i-Pod or i-Phone or i-Pod, so I can't do that, I would love for someone else too. 23:12, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, random person here. If you want to see the app page that sunfish appeared on, look here. It's what I referenced when I helped write the article. 23:18, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

And no, it doesn't say that Sunfish was the only cat Leopardstar confided in. 23:19, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it does. It says "She confided in just one cat, her nursery denmate, Sunfish..." That should be added in. 01:55, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

That's a very ambiguous statement. I'm pretty sure that just meant that Sunfish was the only cat she told about her fear of water, not that Sunfish was the only cat she ever confided anything in. You can't draw too many conclusions so easily if you want to keep the articles factual. 22:50, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I see the misunderstanding. No, I wanted her to add in that Sunfish was the only cat she confided her fear for water to, not that she confided in her for everything. 02:06, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so what am I doing, because y'all just confused me. Decide now, so I can ad this in. Swee tflo wer 23:29, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Say that Sunfish was the only cat Leopardfur confided her fear of water to. 02:49, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleface - Silver Nomination
Hey all! I really want to do Brindleface. I just don't know what needs to be done. Thanks! ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:49, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Try to find some quotes, apart from the main quote, and try to flesh out Fire and Ice if possible same with Forest Of Secrets. Also try to detail her history throughout when she is living. It even says at the top of the page "This Article Needs Improvements. See Brindlefaces's Talk Page for details. 23:53, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Find at least 3 good quotes for the quote section, and expand Forest of Secrets. 17:17, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Try to expand all of the Original Series except for Rising Storm. Read through the article looking for grammar/spelling mistakes. 19:54, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar, are you still working on this? It's been a week. 17:31, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I finished it. Sorry if it's horrible! tried my best. :-/ ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:37, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Into the Wild, Fire and Ice, A Dangerous Path, and The Darkest Hour. 01:53, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Squirrelflame! ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 19:55, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded everything, If somone can fdo me a favor that would be great! I need to know Brindleface's information on page 305 in The Darkest Hour. Google books doesn't show that page :( Thanks! ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 15:31, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

In most sections, it needs a page break, also I'd add a bit more detail to the three last books. 18:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Atelda. I fixed the page break :) ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 21:28, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lakeshine ~ Silver Nomination
I'm expanding the history right now and adding in quotes. I'm determined to not give up on this nomination. 13:29, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

The history looks great, but you don't have a main quote or a quote section... ` 17:00, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I caught a few grammar and flow issues, but I think that's all. 19:59, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

What all needs to be done for it to be silver? I'll help if you guys need it. 00:39, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

See here for what makes an article ready for silver. 01:49, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to add in the quote section and the main quote later Mistystar. :) 02:28, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I added the quote section (will add quotes later) and expanded the history. I'm still trying to see if I can expand it more. How does it look now though? And I can't really find any quotes that would fit as her main quote. 15:06, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

History looks great! Why don't you list the quotes here and we can decide which would be a best main quote? Keep looking for a really good one, though. 17:15, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I expanded the history as much as I could. Does it look okay? I found some quotes and added them on her page. I think the one where she's telling Beetlenose to put Frogkit down should be her main quote, as it shows she's very protective about her kits. If anyone of you find a really good quote, feel free to add it in. 10:20, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you combine the first few paragraphs? They look really short. 21:42, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Done! I think the history looks complete now. Should I expand it anymore? And what do you think of the quote I suggested above as Lakeshine's main quote? 11:51, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

History looks amazing! And the quote you suggested looks pretty good. Just make sure to put in the description when adding it in as a main quote. 18:22, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to a water park tomorrow and stay at a hotel, so I might not be able to work on her page for two days. 14:55, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Rainey added the quotes ;) 15:09, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Find a citation for the trivia. 02:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

For the citation, can I just say Revealed in Bluestar's Prophecy? 07:42, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Say Revealed in the Allegiances of Bluestar's Prophecy, or. 18:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Anything else? 11:52, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I should have told you I already added the reference in. But I don't think anything else could be added. Nice job! 17:33, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? 06:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardfoot - Silver Nomination
I looked over her page, and there isn't much left to add on. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 20:01, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. In my perspective, I don't see any flaws. One thought is to maybe change the main quote to something else. But it's just a thought. ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 21:22, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can Code of the Clans be expanded? 17:32, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Since she's related to Stormfur, wouldn't she be related to Lark and Pine? 18:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll look for a better quote in Bluestar's Prophecy, but I fixed everything else. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 03:10, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you smooth out Crookedstar's Promise, other than that it looks good! 14:36, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 02:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once more votes are over. 18:02, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I didn't fix it earlier, I lost my copy of Crookedstar's Promise. It was inaccurate so I fixed it. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:52, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail - Silver Nomination
I've checked the article and I'm still adding some referenses. If this gets nominated it's my first nomination. I don't know if I'll succeed or not? Any ideas on how to improve it? Or in other words comments?  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  09:30, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

You need a reference for her mate. Try to find some more quotes if you can. And see if you can expand the History section for everything except for Bluestar's Prophecy. 17:29, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I would also delete the kits part of the members section as the reference tells that it's from Warriorcats.com which has been proven to be false. Also, I would like to mention that you have already nominated this. It will most likely succeed in the vote if all you've done what other users have commented on. 17:36, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the history. 18:07, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I tried to expand the history. I have Bluestar's Prophecy but I can't find the page where they say that they could have been mates. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  04:53, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sheer Path Beside Waterfall ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded and smoothed out the history, and added quotes. Comments? 08:07, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Expand SotM. He is also on the patrol where the Tribe cats find the Clan cats near their border. And some of the quotes don't describe Sheer a lot. Can you find some quotes in SotM? 11:58, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I expanded SotM and changed some of the quotes. 14:32, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! :D 14:36, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can the history be expanded? 17:36, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so, because he only appears briefly in Outcast and SotM. 08:23, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well then add more details, maybe? For example, in one of the quotes it says he didn't want to leave because they were already outnumbered, but you didn't say the outnumbered part in the article. 18:31, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Done 20:20, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see anything else. :) 02:04, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

It seems that most of the paragraph in Outcast is about Crag. Perhaps summerize the parts about Crag. Nice work. 04:58, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I rephrased it. 16:27, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cora- Silver Nomination
Any comments? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:45, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

It needs a quotes section with preferably three quotes in it and a main quote. See if anything can be expanded more, and check through for grammar/spelling issues. 01:44, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

All done :) ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 21:15, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, Rowan! Just one thing, I haven't checked if you could do this or not, but is it possible for you to expand the attack on Dodge's group? :) 22:28, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the attack with everything that was left out. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 23:16, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can better quotes be found? The quotes don't seem to reflect her personality so much, like the last one. 02:02, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the last quote to a conversation with Leafstar. Cora doesn't have many quotes but those are some of the best I could find. I also found one more good one so I added it in. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 15:06, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Much better with the quotes! I would also suggest adding in when she found Firestar and offered to help him. 22:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the suggestion. :) I added it in. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 00:47, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

That quote doesn't show her personality though. I thought the quotes put on the pages were supposed to show her personality. That one doesn't. It just shows her saying that they'll stay... 00:48, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm, I agree. Do you guys think I should take it off? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 01:18, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I already did. But, that was before I realized you had the silver nomination for this character. Firestar, I'm sure there are better quotes for Cora. =) 01:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Cloudskye :) Do you guys think I have enough quotes even if that last one isn't there? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 01:35, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, you have enough. It looks good to me. 23:47, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Mistystar :) ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 23:53, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once more votes end, if no one else has any objections. :D 23:55, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Skyheart ~Silver Nomination
(Can someone fix the link?)She is very minor, so why not? And I'll need help because my friend borrowed my Crookedstar's Promise book. 23:49, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the link and you could always use Google books or amazon. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 00:44, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, with dial-up internet it won't work right, trust me. Do you have anything I should fix/add? 00:50, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Quotes? It needs a whole quotes section and a main quote at the top. 01:45, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ivyheart (Thank God) Added the main qoute for me because it wasn't working for me, and my friend has borrowed my book, so I can't add any qoutes, help :D? 19:58, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Try Google books. That's what's been helping me with my nominations :) ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 15:07, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Twigtail ~ Silver Nomination
There are no more quotes and I expanded the history as much as I could. Comments? 16:59, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

It looks awfully short... But I suppose that's to be expected. Can you add in some detail? 18:29, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I fleshed it out a bit. 19:17, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! It looks good! 21:17, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Pricklekit (WC) ~ Silver Nomination
He is an extremely minor character, and I tried to expand what there was. He didn't ever formally appear or say anything so I don't think we could do a main quote. Anyway, comments? 21:54, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Ivy. I would try to maybe find a quote if one is mentioned somewhere. Other than that, excellent. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:35, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing I see missing is the quote. 02:00, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Added the quote. It's the only thing said about him. 21:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add in more detail? 22:19, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job with the quotes! I would have to agree with Squirrelflame on th detail part though. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 11:56, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded the whole article and added quite a few quotes. Comments? 02:09, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Definatly try to expand Fading Echos, other than that, it looks good! 01:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I can't expand Fading Echoes. He was only seen two or three times, and with minor roles. Anything else? 02:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really think he needs six quotes, not counting the main one. So can you maybe get rid of some? I would think 3 or 4 would be good for an article like his. 21:08, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I git rid of some. Other comments? 23:36, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. This will be CBVed once more votes end. 23:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Birchstar (WC) ~ Silver Nomination
My other votes are technically over, so I'm doing this one. He's a very minor character, and there's only one sentence about him at all, so I think it looks good. 02:11, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Since there's only one sentence about him, I guess there's nothing you can do to his article. 17:50, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing ~ Silver Nomination
Ok, I expanded a lot in Starlight, and I tried to expand also in Sunset, Sign of the Moon, and Dark River. I still need to do a lot in Dark River, but I honestly think I need help pointing out all of the times she was seen with Thornclaw. Anyways, comments? 22:19, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if you can nominate this because of the No Reservations rule. Only after an article is mostly fixed and the nominator has done all he or she could to the article is when the nomination takes place. You know you still need to do Dark River, but you're nominating it, which might not be right. I could be mistaken, though. Anyway, I'll try to help with expanding. 22:23, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry if I have, I'll go on right now and try to fix up Dark River so that I won't be breaking the rule either way... 22:44, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. I expanded Dark River. I think it looks a lot better now. 22:58, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think most of the history section can be expanded. Look at the Midnight section before and after I expanded it, and you'll see what I mean. 00:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

See here. The article is missing quite a few appearances, and it should be expanded. 00:17, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! Great job. I'm going to go and expand some more... any place in specific? 04:28, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm expanding as much as I can, though I do not have the books with me currently because I'm not home for a bit. I'll expand as much as I can, though, of course. 04:38, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I took care of everything up to Twilight, so after that the books need expanding. Of course, I am probably the queen of typos, so you might want to check the parts I expanded. :D 18:34, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Will do. 04:41, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnpelt - Silver Nomination
I've edited it to make it ready for silver. Comments? <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:59, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The article needs a main quote. Expand Outcast, Eclipse, and the OM series. 00:11, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Done. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 19:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

In Dark River, it says the senior warriors are moved. You should explain why they are moved, because moved can have many meanings. 21:30, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:43, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I got a few grammatical mistakes, but I think that's all. 18:34, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 14:44, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the last paragraph of Eclipse. It could be more detailed. 23:45, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Join?
I was wondering if I could join, if that was okay. :) Mi  st  y!  15:27, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! See the FAQ for any questions, and welcome to PC! 16:03, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Joining?
Can I join?

~Brackenfur66~ 21:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66~Brackenfur66~ 21:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, please read the FAQ if you have any questions! 01:31, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hey guys
Hey guys. I know I went inactive, but can you all accept me again? I was sick ALL summer. Dx ❁   YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ❁  18:17, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

No problem! I'll add you in. Read the FAQ if you don't remember anything, and welcome back! 18:24, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Rippleclaw ~ Silver Nomination
Rippleclaw did appear alot in Crookedstar's Promise but has no quotes.

~Brackenfur66~ 13:01, August 24, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66~Brackenfur66~ 13:01, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Would this count as going against the no reservation rule? Because Crookedstar's Promise isn't completed yet......... 13:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it probably would. It is nowhere near completed...it needs CP, and quotes. So, either complete it all right now, or withdraw this? 21:20, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar's Promise looks great now. Thanks, Rainwillow! :D I don't think this has to be withdrawn. 02:46, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay! Add some quotes please. 06:44, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I do not own Crookedstar's Promise. :/

~Brackenfur66~ 13:21, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66~Brackenfur66~ 13:21, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Then......are you going to withdraw this? Because Rippleclaw needs Crookedstar's Promise done and his page also needs some quotes. 14:45, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwillow will be taking over this nomination.

~Brackenfur66~ 15:13, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66~Brackenfur66~ 15:13, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

So yeah.....Brackenfur gave the nomination to me. I'm still expanding his history and adding in quotes. 15:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ottersplash~Silver nomination
My first since spring, sadly, but she has a good article. ❁  YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ❁ 12:31, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand the super edition series? Or add more detail to those sections? I think it would also be good if you found some more quotes. ;) 14:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, do what Atelda said above. XD Oh, and can you find a better main quote? 14:44, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

CP can definitely be expanded. And find more quotes. She has a lot of good quotes in CP. 22:50, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Falmetail: Silver Nomination
I am nominating Falmetail becasue he looks good enough to be silver! Comments?

~Brackenfur66~ 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66~Brackenfur66~ 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mean Flametail? His second quote doesn't show his personality; you might want to find a better one. also, expand Night whispers, and Fading echoes. 22:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Outcast, Sunrise, The Fourth Apprentice, and Sign of the Moon. I'm sure there's better quotes somewhere else. 23:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)