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Ivypool (Q) ~ For Approval
Hi I'm gonna tweak this so she has shredded ears and so the shading actually looks good. Also, can we add stuff if it's a completely different side? None of the other images even show this side of her. I can take it off if I have to, don't worry.

it's all up to you what to put on the side that isn't shown, yes. 03:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

re-up

Define the light on the ---> foreleg a bit? 17:22, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred, I feel. And the shading is leaking on the stomach.

Define the tail shading?

re-up I'm gonna ask for a second opinion on the stripes because I checked and I feel like it's around the same blurriness. I'll define the light later.

Compared to the images I think the stripes could be sharpened a tiny bit.

23:26, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

re-up um do you guys see a difference here? because I don't lol

I do. Comments before approval?

01:37, June 22, 2018 (UTC) I’m sorry, but I feel like the shading is too dark. It makes the white look a little gray here. It’s also leaking on the face

can ya make the white tailtip more visible too 23:56, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

re-up

noticed something weird so i fixed it

Echosong (loner) ~ For Approval
yeah i dont like this --

I think it’s good! Could you define the shading, though? 23:29, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

The stripes on the legs could be smudged out more, and maybe have one or two more stripes on the haunch that go more diagonally between the ones that go just downwards and just > way. iirc also the muzzle should be pale and the stripes go lightly over the chest, to match the other images

Re-uploaded sorry school's been beating me up with a stick and i had no motivation to do anything other than play animal crossing and make plans to overthrow the admins on the wiki discord in my downtime --

oh noes. also, the stripes on the flank could still fill more space (see starclan version) and could you define/darken the shading?

Dewspring (W) ~ For Approval
Cosmo made this first, so I am redoing it, but also not redoing it? I think kits were allowed to redo the chararts Cosmo originally made.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 19:17, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

We decided if she made the original image, then we would act like they were not made, so anyone could "redo" it. Add the texture and define the shading depth. 19:21, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink color needs to match the other images as well, and this seems to be a different shade^^

Add texture as well. Sorry didn’t see Vec's comment. 21:07, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

If I picked the color correctly, codes for the pelt and earpink are 7e7e7e and 896565, if that is helpful. Smooth out the shading a little bit. 22:02, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This was kinda hard... Never done texture before.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 11:31, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps define the texture.

13:04, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. 14:00, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink color is still the wrong color, and the base color looks darker on this than the other images. Might be the shading in this case, if so define the light so the base shows through, or lighten the base itself to match^

Re-uploaded 100% it's the right color now. Completely redid the shading, but I don't seem to get it right. Any tips? Also, I don't really understand what you mean with "define shading depth". Help? :P --

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 15:43, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

There's shading leaking behind the ---> ear. And it's okay! Shading depth is the gradience of the shading. Take a look at any object in the real world that has shadows on it. Notice how the shadows are all the same color? There's depth to it. Take a look at Broken's image above yours of Skywatcher. Notice how the shadows are blurred and have some depth (ie are not the same color)? The shading in the center of the image is different from the shading near the lineart.

One way to add shading depth, add another layer on top of your preexisting shading layer. Add some more shading with whatever color you used prior but make it a bit darker and recede it a bit so the first shading layer is shown. Blurr/smudge it however you want and lower the opacity so that it seems smooth against the other shading layer. Most people use 2 to whatever shading layers. I hope this helps ^^ 19:29, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Here some visual aids for you. Here are my shading layers for Parsleyseed. You don't have to have that many, but I tend to be messy with shading. It's all about your preference. Here is just my first layer of shading. The left side has the opacity lowered, while the right side has it raised so you can see it. Here are the second layer and third layer of shading. Each layer is smoothed and has its opacity lowered so it appears to blend in. :D 19:51, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Vec! I played around with some different layers and I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 20:04, June 19, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs/paws ear/head area, and muzzle, there's a few out of place lighter pixels on the back, shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back/rump, and texture is leaking away from the lineart on the chest, both sides of the tail, back paws, muzzle, and < front leg

Probably define the texture, tone down the tail texture as it kind of looks out of place, maybe add more texture lines, and smooth out the shading.

Still working, Waffle? 04:40, 6/24/2018

Rascal (GC) ~ CBA
Experimented with stripes. Also, 'bout to head out for a long road trip so I may not update right away. 03:53, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

He looks too greenish-brown, mostly on the paler parts. 20:46, 6/23/2018

I feel like there'd be a little bit of shadow on the chest/neck area. 23:55, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 01:55, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 05:00, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Boots (GC) ~ CBA
I decided to keep the pattern because I really liked it. Comments? 03:58, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

maybe define the shading everywhere a bit?

Reuploaded. 18:08, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 05:09, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Cobweb (GC) - For Approval
I'm gonna mess with the colors and shading. Just wanted to get this posted. 15:22 Fri Jun 22

Reuploaded 15:52 Fri Jun 22

Again I can't get it to look how I want -___- 16:56 Fri Jun 22

Could you lighten the texture just a little? It seems a little rough, in some parts? It could just be me though. But I am the Chosen One 16:57, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shoulder shading.

The shading looks a little flat. Could you add more depth? This is nice, though! 20:56, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid it (again). The pale is light silver, not white btw 00:42 Sun Jun 24

I know you said it isn't white, but could you dull it down just a bit more? 02:02, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Feather (GC) - For Approval
this shading i hate it 20:08, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading just a bit. (  21:47, 6/23/2018  ) ​

maybe expand the shading slightly as well? 23:52, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:17, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the belly and shoulder shading.

Pipsqueak (GC) - For Approval
(  21:47, 6/23/2018  ) ​

This is lovely! The shading is leaking on the tail, front leg closest to us, back leg, and the face. 21:58, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I can't see where the shading is leaking? Could you redline/circle where it is? I've looked and honestly cannot find it. (  22:24, 6/24/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

Could you possibly darken the shading just a tad? <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 22:34, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">22:38, 6/24/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

for the earlier comment about leaking shading, it's very slight, but it's on the > side of the tail, v tiny thing

Re-uploaded. That was... really minor and fairly nitpicky..... <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">23:06, 6/24/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

Mittens (GC) ~ For Approval
the slinky malinki herself. 23:43, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

This is very pretty :o. Could you define the shading on the tail? I can't tell where it is. 00:08, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded I tried, but it's very hard to make shading show through the extensive tail stripe. trust me, a lot of that actually is shading. 04:24, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Define the pattern a little under the shading on the hind legs. <span style="">06:39, 6/24/2018

most of that actually is the pattern. 21:31, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

This is absolutely lovely, one of your best I would believe. Can you define the shading on the front paw furthest from us?

22:18, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Peanut (GC) ~ For Approval
pfft i spent an hour and a half trying to shade this, i might redo the shading. love the new blanks though! 00:56, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Add the herbs, as she's a healer. 01:55, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the back leg some? <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 20:34, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tried fixing the shading a little. 00:35, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (GC) - For Approval


22:17, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Define the ear pink; I can't see any at all. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">23:07, 6/24/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​ <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">23:07, 6/24/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#fc00ff 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

The tear is on the wrong ear. <span style="">00:42, 6/25/2018

Perhaps add some shading behind the head? 07:33, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Spiresight (GC) - For Approval
this took like forever to finish, rip because GIMP wanted to crash <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 17:12, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is great c: 03:55, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups also thanks <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 05:57, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Did you add the texture? With as dark as this is, it's pretty hard to see. If you did, lighten the base a tad so we can tell what's what. For reference, the StarClan image is the first in this set.

Dotty (GC) - For Evaluation
I have no clue how to reserve images or even join... help? Like I added my name to the reservation table, but does that count. I tried Malina457 (talk) 01:54, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Soften the edges around the stripes. Define the shading depth. There is waste all around the image, please erase it. Good job on this! :) 03:53, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I see some foot waste, but other than that, I think I got it? Thanks btw :) Malina457 (talk) 04:47, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups Waste be gone, I think Malina457 (talk) 04:50, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

There is still some waste on the other edge of the image, left of the elbow on the front leg closest to us. Please smooth out the shading. 04:59, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I think I got the waste? It's being very elusive, and I tried with the shading Malina457 (talk) 05:32, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the shading on the tail, chest, and ---> front leg. Very nice! Waaaay better than my first image. 07:32, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

You still missed the waste. It’s in the same spot, plus behind the tail and behind the back leg. I can try to circle it in red and show you, if you need? 13:43, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Can you please circle it, I did try XD I will uploading soon Malina457 (talk) 13:46, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I literally can't see the waste at all, anywhere, not in my program or on the wiki, it's being very elusive XD. Also thanks Vec :) Malina457 (talk) 14:08, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the tail shading, define the eye depth, and maybe add some shading along the top of the > ear since it looks slightly flat^^ gg for your first one

Reups Better? Malina457 (talk) 14:50, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Cinderheart (Alt A) ~ For Approval
Since nobody took this image when my reservation ran out, I believe I can post this now? (finally back home with wifi, thank goodness) I renewed my reservation.