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Brackenfur (W) ~ Redone
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar. 05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D 19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should be shorter; it doesn't go all the way to his underarm. It's just on his flank. 20:50, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? 00:41, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Possibly thicken the stripes a bit? 01:14 Sat Feb 4

Make the earpink a bit bigger too. 01:18 Sat Feb 4

Make the scar a bit thicker. 03:55, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, i think the ear-pink is fine and for the stripes, they are the same thickness as the other ones. Other then that, comments? 18:27, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please make the earpink a bit bigger and define it? Also move it into the ear more. 19:13 Sun Feb 5

Blur the shading too. 23:34 Sun Feb 5

The stripes may be the same thickness as his kit charart, but this isn't a kit. As he grew, his stripes naturally grew as well to be proportional to his body size. On that note, the apprentice charart should be tweaked as well. 04:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading looks... odd, i'm trying to fix that, don't worry. 21:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That's because it's dark. Lighten it, pleeease. :P 21:20, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stupid shading Why must it be so irritating? Comments? 21:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading a little more. And where is the light source? I can't find one. 22:46, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 00:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten or blur the shading, and define the earpink. Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes and change the color of the scar to something a bit more different from the stripes, I almost told you to get rid of the extra ginger stripe on the flank. XD 15:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes some more. 22:50, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

... Okay, I'm sorry, but this just doesn't feel like Brackenfur. Can we do an overhaul on the image and make it a redo?-- 23:55, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (W) - Redone
Finally a space! Needed to match Leader image. OA was Elorisa. Comments? :) 09:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is way better than mine was <3. Define the earpink a tad C:  Elork   14:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the break more dramatic looking, like it is on his apprentice charart. It is described as looking like a broken twig, after all, and here it just looks like he's rather pleased with something (must have killed another apprentice). 04:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I had some trouble with the tail, any chance of a redline? Every way I did it it just looked curled... 06:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I can try giving you one ^^ 23:42, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That'd be great if you could. 08:58, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Here, I got this. http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120209051817!Shellyheart.png Make sure the fur just out on the outside of the break. 05:19, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lineart fail. -.- This is about as good as it will get. Thanks for the redline Shelly. 03:33, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (L) ~ Tweaked
The OA was some user named *Wildfire* :P shading needed to be tweaked. 16:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh yeah, whoever is that user. XP Naw. This looks nice. Could you perhaps darken the shading a tad? But, if it's fine, that's alright. ;) 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:24, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. Nice.05:22, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Still working on this, Wild? 17:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yes -- 01:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lilyfur (Q) - Tweaked
This is bad! Original artist (am I the only one who still says "Original artist"?) was Echomist, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 20:09, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded without anyone telling me to I redid the shading again. 20:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Bkur the shading a bit more. 20:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple. 20:33, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded 18:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. :3  21:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also darkened it. 00:11, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's a thin line of waste on the bottom of the image. 02:29, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nvm, the changes weren't showing. Sorry 'bout that. 02:29, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandy with a very slight tweak by Icey. I had permission to redo this, as the shading needed to be darkened, wrong shading placement, and the colors were wrong, along with some blurred lineart. I was told to keep the same style. Comments? 20:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is really good. Blur/smudge the stripes on the chest area a tad bit. 166.249.107.125 20:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

^that was me^. Forgot to sign in. 20:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Like this? ^^ Hope changes are showing... 20:23, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make him less greenish and more brown. 23:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. :D 23:33 Sun Feb 5

Could you tweak the stripe on his face? It looks more like a tattoo (you know, one of those tattoos from Yu-Gi-Oh that all the badies seem to have) than a stripe. 04:14, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I want only ask.. because this is beatiful, are we going to redone his apprentice charart too? (oh bad question) and may I do it, since Im OA? 17:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, go for it. 17:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely Wifband <333 Define the tail shading a bit. 00:25, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the legs, makes it look like they're darker, like Brackenfoot. Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:55, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 03:36, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Still, make him more brown. 18:10, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (Ki) ~ Redone
Well, permission to redo the shading, after Cloudy found out about it, from Cloudy on chat. The lineart also looked blurred. OA = Sandstar with a tweak/redo by Bloo. Comments for imrpovement? 20:09, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad. This is wonderful, Rain. 20:11, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ew on ear-pink, i'll fix it if it is commented on. And thanks Cloudy ^.^ 20:31, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and nose colour. 21:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:16, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that chest highlink/shading a bit please. 06:41, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Re-uploaded. 19:33, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (D) ~ Redone
Had permission to redo. Reason was: Blotchy highlights, earpink, and a triangle tabby. I don't know who the OA was, as Oblivion renamed the file. Comments? 03:23, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely job dear! ^^ Make the eaprink stand out a bit more. 09:06, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more triangular too. 23:08 Fri Feb 10

Stormfur (W) ~ Redone
Okay. There were so many issues with the other image, that it begged to be redone (again). I think the OA is Bluestar, but, I ended up re-doing it. xD 03:39, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and define the eye depth. Lovely as always, Cloudy! 8D 03:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'll fix the ear pink, but not the eye. It came directly from his other images, and I don't want to change that. 03:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/midriff highlight some. <3 05:25, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Re-uploaded. No highlights on this one. 05:30, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It seems like the light source for the head and the rest of the body are different from each other. The head one's coming from the right and the other is coming from the left. could you fix that? 09:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did teh shading. Still looks bad. xD 00:28, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nah. Increase the shading on the shoulders/neck and blur the shading on the chest and maybe lessen the shading on the top of the muzzle. 00:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

You have that small ridge of light shading close to the lineart on the back. Could you darken that? Breeze whisker  00:49, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (W) - Redone
OA was Bramble with a tweak by Mint and Icy, I think. Stripes had to be redone and it was in the redo section. Comments? 03:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some. Sky Fus Roh Dah 04:17, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The apprentice's stripes were redone, so could you match that image? This is lovely. :) 08:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't really like the way I made the apprentice. I would love you if you redid the apprentice too because this is lovely. Darken the earpink a bit ^^ 15:31, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Mountain Sure thing! To be honest, I totally forgot that she was seen as an apprentice. 04:49, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Sky To Kill An Empire 22:56, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:23, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Round the shading on the shoulder a little. Breeze whisker  00:47, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less bubble gum pink, and more flesh colored. And it might just be my computer screen, as it tends to throw colors off a bit, but she looks a tad green. 11:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think that might be your computer screen, it looks fine to me, but then again, I have bad eyesight (no joke). 22:20, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brightwhisker (D) - Tweaked
Shading tweak. I have no idea who the OA is because Sandy renamed the file. Comments? 04:03, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the white a bit? Good job. ^^ 09:02, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't the brown match the leader image? 16:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I had this reserved..? O_o 22:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, Im an idiot. I accidently reserved her warrior image XD 22:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded @Bloo, no you're not an idiot! You just made a mistake. We all make them! 04:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Uh huh, sure....xD <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 08:18, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:21, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, the color? It's still a lot lighter than the leader. Or is the leader image getting tweaked as well? 00:40, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's just because of the shading, since on her leader, the shading placement is mainly on the brown and the highlights on the white. 00:59, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

No, it doesn't really match at all, and it's not just cause of the shading. Any chance of you just redoing it to match? 03:36, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Words cannot describe how much I hate this charart. 05:40, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

On the middle of her forehead in her leader image, there's white there. Add some? 22:31, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge (KP) ~ Redone
I snatched this the second Paleh said it needed to be added to the list on the talk page. I've wanted to do a kittypet for a while, since I've only done one before, and I love black and white cats. ;) He needed black shoulders and a white tail-tip, so I just made him a tux patterned cat. OA was Quailflightthecat with tweaks/redos by Ashshadow, Bramble, and Ivystripe. Comments? 16:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his back/base of his tail if there's supposed to be any xD. This is beautiful <3. 19:01, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less red and lighten the black just a tad. 20:56, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

His eyes lok a little off to me. Could you use the one on the tutorial? 22:58, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

They look alright to me, just like he's scared or something, and considering his personality, might be accurate...:P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

In the words of Paleh: " Ass Add shading shading to the collar" X3 23:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded-re. 05:10, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I wouldn't like to be known for such a little mistake. :(. Define the earpink a tad. 02:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Oh hush Mounty. XD Bright (our) left eye a bit. 03:35, February 10, 2012 (UTC)


 * It is bright. It's just in shadow. 15:09, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dustpelt (W) - Redone
Original artist was Bramble, with an eye tweak from Nightshine, a redo from Cloudskye, and a small eye depth tweak from Icestorm that was reverted. Comments? 20:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

LOL. My horrible stripes have finally been redone! Thank you, Moon. This looks much better. Define the ear pink a tad. 20:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded No problem. 21:01, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks awesome O8 blur or smudge the paler belly 22:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the tail. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:05, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:47, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make his stripes a tad bigger? He looks a bit mottled. 11:51, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't look mottled to me. 17:55, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

He looks oddly flat. Define the shading and highlights, and maybe darken/intensify them. Breeze whisker  00:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll get rid of the waste at the next reupload. 02:39, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

...or get rid of it now? What's the point in reuploading it when it's not completely finished? <span style="">02:47 Fri Feb 10

...then just critique it, I'll be reuploading it? 02:54, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Well that's the thing. It's perfect as it is. The only issue is the waste. So... <span style="">03:02 Fri Feb 10

I'll comment if you want. Define the earpink on the cat's right side (on the left ear, right side of the earpink). Feel free to disagree. <span style="">05:21, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Reuploaded 18:07, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Stonetooth (E) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and was redone by me. And now I'm redoing it again XP I got permission to redo and I absolutly hated his old one. It was a triangle tabby too. Comments? 23:42, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

lololol. Darken the shading just a little bit, and especially under his chin and on his front leg 23:44, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  23:51, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

You have waste under the chin! And under the paws, Hahahah! 8D 23:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded hgfdheoir *mountainranges* D8< 23:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

That space of just grey under the ear is bothering me. Could you put a small stripe or something there? Breeze whisker  00:44, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  01:26, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Frecklewish (MCA) - Redone
I hate to see this one redone, but it's a triangle tabby, so... :P OA was the lovely Oblivion. Comments? 12:34, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define thear ear pink on ---> side. Lovely :3  13:15, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

-cries- Y u redo my image :'c Just kidding, it's better than before ^^ Her eyes should be a darker green; they look kind of yellow right now. 03:39, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Well she doesn't actually have a cited eye color Oblivion, so if it's Ok, I'm gonna keep it like this. xD 04:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W) ~ Tweaked
I feel I should do more tweaks -_- Anyway, It needed a bushy tail. It was on the list. OA was Bramble and was tweaked/redone by a lot of people. Comments? 14:50, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the tail more squirrel-like by any chance? o3o Lovely. ^^ 16:10, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oi. Lineart fail. Is this better? 01:43, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Not sure if the changes are showing or not, but it still doesn't look very squirrel-like. Maybe make it a bit more like the leader's tails? Not so spiky, but still fluffy. 11:44, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Highlights needed to be blurred, but I re-did the shading. OA was Mousetalon with a redo by Oblivion and tweaks by Paleh, Scarlet and Icestorm. 21:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Waste inbetween the legs, m'dear, Fire. 21:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

XD That always happens. Re-Uploaded. 21:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">01:55 Sat Feb 11

Mossheart (SC) (MC) ~ Redone
OAs were Echomist and Scarletwind. The shading needed to be redone and the highlights were too bright. Since the patten was difficult it was labled as redo. To you two, I am sorry for ruining this D: 22:01, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste by the tail, and the smudges aren't following the direction the fur should go. 22:29, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:52, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed heading :D. Make the earpink bigger and blur it. <span style="">23:04 Fri Feb 10

Hmm...I know the original file is named this, but, you should rename is File:Mossheart (SC).mc.png because of the charart template and it's the proper page name. This looks lovely, Silver. 23:11, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still named improperly. :P File:Mossheart (SC).png :P 03:03, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make her short-furred? It says that she didn't envy Quailfeather(?)'s thick,long fur, suggesting she has short fur. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Q) - Tweaked
I tweaked the color shade to make it darker. Original Artist is Mumble I think, with a minor tweak by Ivy and a tweak/redo by Paleh. What do you think? <span style="">23:12, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Purdy <3 Lighten the shading a tad. 23:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Ah, tweaking. =D Anyway, it was on the list for shading, so, I just layered some shading overtop of the image, not major or anything. Okay, I think the OA was Snowfeather1 with some help along the way from Night shine. Comments? 02:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and blur them 03:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC)- Tweaked


I think I died while making him....I swear I did....Anyway, had blurred lineart shading was blotchy, needing a crusty/runny nose, and patchy fur, OC was Dawnfeather, With a Tweak from Ivyheart. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Snowtuft (W) - Tweaked
OA was Insaneular with a redo by Mintstarr. The scar needed to be more realistic. I tried something new with this, tell me if it works or not :P  04:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)