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Guardian Cat Blanks ~ For Approval
Is this right? I don't know what to name the file, or the heading. I can change it later if needed. But thanks everyone who voted for me!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:41, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure how approving a blank works, but I would wait until someone who has been here longer than me says how to name it. Anyways, could you make the ears a little longer on both blanks? Many cats have longer ears than what is shown on the blank. I think that's how comments on blanks works. I would wait until someone who has seen a blank approved to comment before you do this though. (Just to make sure I'm commenting on this right). 12:08, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

The front legs should be longer and the front paws flatter CØØKIE (talk) 12:22, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I believe  the heading needs to be Guardian Cat Blanks - For Approval. Can you make the inner lineart a bit thicker? (If that makes sense) Most of it appears to be 1px

the eyes should be somewhat smaller, and maybe make the longhaired tail more fluffy. it is long fur, after all. 16:12, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe the nose shouldn't be connected to the eyes, or spaced out a bit more? :) 17:56, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Don't know a lot about anatomy, but I think it only looks connected because of how the face is situated/the direction the cat's head is facing?

I think it's ok, when the eyes get made a bit smaller there'll be more distance to represent the bridge of the nose. maybe make the nose slightly smaller too 18:25, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Make the tail a bit longer.

The left front leg looks a bit smaller and squished than the others. 16:57, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

I'll upload later tonight, sorry for such a wait for the past couple days. I'll rename them gc.long.png and gc.short.png when I get the chance tonught and thanks for all the critiques. I appreciate it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:30, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, Cosmo, can you rename them guardian cat.long.png and guardian cat.short.png? 00:07, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yes I will. Also, I'll need to upload them under two different files as I realized it as these are only under one file. I'll get around to that sometime tonight or tomorrow! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:08, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

It's good, Cosomo. Blanks are not held to the same time restrains as regular images are; that would be impossible, due to the fact that anatomy is difficult and forcing someone to produce a new blank in a short amount of time by restricting them is just asking for rushed and sloppy work. Doesn't mean you can take two weeks to upload though, it just means that the one-month limit does not apply here.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks for all the nice comments and sorry for taking so long to upload. I may edit the eyes again. They still bother me, lol. But I think it's looking better! Also, uploaded with two different files and renamed them with the proper naming, and thanks to Appledash and Jaycie for being so kind about this! It means a lot. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 23:21, October 24, 2017 (UTC)

You're doing a great job, Cosmo! Anyways, could you make the tail on the short-haired blank end a little thinner? If I know one thing about cat anatomy, it's that a cat's tail becomes thinner as it nears the end of it. 01:17, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

Make the eyes a little wider and more oval, and space them out a bit. Also I feel like the hip should be wider on both. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 12:54, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ears should still be a little bit smaller and more pointed, the lineart around the paws is still a little thin, plus the front paws seem....small for lack of a better word? like when you look up a cat sitting down, you know what I mean? 04:34, October 30, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for taking so long to upload. I got caught up with homework, and then I got really sick. Hopefully, I'll upload tomorrow!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:42, October 31, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I still think the face is way off. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:55, November 2, 2017 (UTC)

to match the style of the other blanks, i think you should make the fur tips less round, if you get what i mean.

Could you widen the -> eye on both blanks by like one pixel? It looks a little off to me compared to the other eye. 10:20, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you thicken the paw lineart just a bit? Particularly the two front paws. And this is beautiful! :D 13:37, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the eye lineart? ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

I think the thickness of the eye lineart is fine. On all of the other blanks, the eye lineart is one pixel thick, so why make it thicker here? 22:55, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps make the nose(s) a bit smaller?

When will be introduced schemes of shadow on this chararts if chararts be introduced in wiki? I can not wait to start making Fierce! ::::D – 14:14, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Please don't comment unless it's a critique. I know it's taking a while for me to upload each time, but please be patient. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 14:31, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''These are turning out much better. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:28, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

they are, dude. I think you should thicken the linear art on the tail a little bit.

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:58, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Finpaw (Alt. A) - CBA
Basically the regular apprentice with better shading and part of the tail missing. I took inspiration from Halftail's images. Comments? 01:00, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

I loved Finpaw in this book. Smooth out the shading near the top of the tail? Also, defien the shading on the face and define the earpink in the right ear? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:23, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Our right or his? 21:33, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Decided to just change both ears. Also changed the tail slightly, after reading about how he lost it. 23:18, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Can you crop the image to the lineart? There's loads of extra space on the top of the image.

Reuploaded. 14:12, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Violetshine (W) - For Approval
fun fact, I've had this done (along with the rest of her set) since The Apprentice's Quest.

Now that is some dedication right there. Could you make her eyes amber? 02:07, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

I may have forgotten about that. Her eyes are still blue in all of my .psd files... mainly because I keep forgetting to change them. Re-uploaded.

Beautiful! Define the shading on the tail and the legs possibly? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:23, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

I can't define it on the tail due to how the white and black are placed. And where on the legs? Because it's pretty defined on the front legs and I'd rather not define that anymore.

Sorry, I saw it on the wrong screen, but I can see it. I'm sorry. Maybe smooth out the shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:45, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

But so many images that were just approved recently have a lot rougher shading than mine does...? I'm so confused. The shading on this one isn't meant to be smooth.

Ignore them! Sorry! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:54, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

Gravelpaw (App) - For Approval
quick and kind of easy. pretty sure this is my first apprentice?

Oooh, nice shade choice. I like it. Could you smooth out the rump shading just a tiny bit?

reups 👌

Define the shading on the legs and face? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:24, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly smooth the tail shading. I'm here to never let you forget your first charart: Spiderleg's StarClan image >:D <span style="">08:39, 11/08/2017

reups jokes on you broken, I think about it EVERY DAY already >:^)

Palepaw (A) ~ For Approval
ileuarycneinn math test tomorrow. should be working now...

I don't know if it is just me, but I think her eyes appear more yellow than amber 14:16, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Also tweaked the shading a bit

Define the eye depth just a little. <span style="">18:59, 11/07/2017

Could you define the shading on the tail? 21:21, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face a smidge and define the earpink slightly. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:26, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried, but it's difficult without making her look gray

Fidgetpaw (Lo) - CBA
I will mess with the shading and brush for the markings later. Wanted to get this up before I could forget. <span style="">20:40 Tue Nov 7

Smooth the tummy shading. Cute. <span style="">20:41, 11/07/2017

Smooth out all the shading, actually. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:25, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Can you extend the black to reach the eye? 21:43, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid it. The other one was kind of hideous lol <span style="">22:05 Wed Nov 8

Define the shading everywhere?

Reuploaded Any more than this and he will start looking gray <span style="">00:03 Thu Nov 9

This is wonderful and it matches perfectly. CBA?

Larksong (SS) (Alt. W) - For Approval
Just sitting here making alts, man. 21:20, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the shading and define it on the tail. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:25, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! 02:26, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white just a bit more. Nice pattern choice; I like it. 8D

Reuploaded Is this any better? And thank you! ^^ 01:20, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Dragonfly (Ki) - CBA
I really like this. ;o; 00:25, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the body. <span style="">00:28, 11/08/2017

Reuploaded 20:14, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? Well done, Pepper!

Dewpaw (HJ) (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
Am unoriginal. <span style="">00:59, 11/08/2017

Smoothen out chest shading? This is great!

Re-uploaded. Thanks Jay! <span style="">01:39, 11/08/2017

Define the shading in the left ear and define it on the hindleg closest to us. 14:08, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:15, 11/08/2017

define the shading depth everywhere

Re-uploaded. Thought it was pretty visible, but okay. <span style="">19:29, 11/09/2017

Dragonfly (ro) - CBA
forgot the tangled fur. i'll add it in a minute. 01:36, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. fluffs. 01:48, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. made brighter. 01:55, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think she should have tangled fur, as it appeared to have to due with her sickness. 03:25, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. also made just a tiny bit lighter. 00:29, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the shading on the legs could do with a little smoothing

Re-uploaded. 14:55, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Onestar (Star) ~ For Approval
Grey muzzle kitties~ <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:00, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

I actually think you should remove the gray muzzle. It says in Darkest Night that he was young and strong again, and the gray muzzle was from him being old.

you mind lightening the shading? `

'''Re-uploaded. '''No more grey muzzle kitties. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:54, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Sandynose (W) ~ For Approval
because, y'know. I can. 18:46, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

Nectarpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Sweet name.

Can you define the shading on the back paw furthest away from us? 14:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading on the left side of the face should be moved to the right, since that looks like where the shadow is coming from on the rest of the body, also define the shading on the front paw furthest from us. 18:15, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on two paws furthest from us

Cloudmist (Alt. Lo) ~ For Approval
Yup – 15:43, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth those dark patches of shading a little on the belly and hindleg furthest from us, the white on the back paws and belly look a bit gray. 18:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Echosong (Star) ~ For Approval
Eh. 16:31, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the base of the tail and flank a bit? She's so pretty! 18:09, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thank you! 20:05, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

She should have a notch in -> ear, shouldn't she?

Fringepaw (A) ~ For Approval
Shorthaired bc genetically impossible to be longhaired