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Milkfur (WC) (D) - Redone
I'm proud of this too. 18:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Give her the dark gray ear-tips, and blur the highlights and shading a tad, other than that, good job. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 18:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Define the shading around the haunch and legs, and maybe make the earpink a tad more triangular. 19:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Make him more of an off-white. 19:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
 * Mossy was original artist. 19:13, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC) I had to fix the shading. Sorry. 19:37, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the earpink just a little. 20:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 00:31, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Blur the shading. 05:27, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 16:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Make him a little more cream. 17:07, July 8, 2011 (UTC) I really think the color's fine. 17:09, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded: I lightened the shading a bit. 17:24, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Can you add a highlight to the tail? It looks a bit 2D. The highlights on the body look wonderful! 17:46, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 17:52, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Could you make it a tad more cream colored? It looks like it's barely off-white as it is. 20:12, July 8, 2011 (UTC) I think the colour is fine, lighten the shading and blur it more, though. 20:51, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded: Is this good? 21:15, July 8, 2011 (UTC) Make the earpink more pale.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 01:15, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Also shape it a tad more into a triangle. 05:27, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 18:25, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the head highlight to match the other highlights. 01:43, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Blur the highlights a little more with the shading. 02:27, July 10, 2011 (UTC) The ear pink looks a little blotchy; smooth it out a bit :3 21:42, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Still working on this, to let you all know. 21:59, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Shouldn't this be approved since no-one has commented on it for four days? 04:19, July 16, 2011 (UTC) I don't know, she never said reuploaded, but if she did reupload it then it will be approved. 21:52, July 17, 2011 (UTC) Well, to be honest, I didn't add highlights, so I think it's fine. Sorry. 23:28, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Then...did you smoothen out the earpink? Other than that, it looks ready. 15:43, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. It may be just my computer, but it looks like there's barely any shading at all. :) Then smoothen the ear pink.  HA WK FI RE98  17:03, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I think it's you computer. I was told to lighten the shading earlier. It's illogical to just darken it again. 17:18, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Fixed ear pink. 17:29, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Bramble I believe. Then Night shine and Sandy did tweeks on it. I just lightened it then toned down the highlights. Took me about five minutes. :) 17:56, July 9, 2011 (UTC) The eyes look a little dark to me, but that might just be because of his pelt color.  19:23, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded: It was pretty dark. I lightened it.  21:18, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Ear pink looks too...hurr durr. R-R-R-R-R-Redden it and reshape it so it wouldnt be so smudged. --
 * Please use proper English. I cannot find hurr durr in my dictionary. And don't stutter, either. You might want to get that keyboard looked at. -_- 23:57, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:14, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Darken the earpink and blur the shading more. 01:22, July 10, 2011 (UTC) I think the earpink color looks fine, but straighten out the base of it a tad =) 03:47, July 10, 2011 (UTC) the highlights are a bit too light. Where's the light source?  06:08, July 10, 2011 (UTC) There is no light source. There doesn't need to be one, and all I did was lighten the fur and eyes and darken the highlights. I think the shading's fine considering it got approved. I will fix the earpink and darken the highlights.  00:33, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Blur the highlights and shading a lot.  00:43, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Okay, then darken the highlights.  08:06, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded: Eww...  15:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Maybe you should make the highlights bigger. Then it would be easier to blur and darken.  15:59, July 11, 2011 (UTC) When I darkened/blurred them, they became smaller. I think they were better before.  16:57, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Thats why I said they should be bigger... I guess its fine. :D 02:08, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Change the strength of the brush and then try blurring. I think the highlights should be blurred. They seem out of place. 19:58, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! :D But you should make his pelt a little darker. He's more of a gray-black. I've imagined him a bit darker than this. ;)  HA WK FI RE98  17:01, July 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * This already borders black. If I darken it anymore, it will look like a black cat. 17:20, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneteller (H) ~ Redone
I added patchy fur, darkened the eye color a tad, and whitened the muzzle a tiny bit more. The original artist was Nightshine, I believe. 18:08, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Remove the mud, since healers don't typically leave the cave. It was discussed here. 18:18, July 9, 2011 (UTC) De-saturate the ear pink -- Also, it says he's a dark brown tabby...shouldn't the rest of his fur be a little darker? 20:01, July 9, 2011 (UTC) Yes, darken it, remove the mud, and fix the earpink. 01:21, July 10, 2011 (UTC) His chest looks yellow. 02:39, July 10, 2011 (UTC) I think you should just re-do it. 06:02, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Re-done. Meep. :S 15:28, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Its better...define and blur the shading, blur the stripes. The head looks a bit green. 15:44, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Give him a white muzzle (Poor Rainlegs xp ) Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 17:56, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Geez, it must be a pain to work on this. xD Redden the earpink. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:13, July 10, 2011 (UTC) The stripes are just giant triangles. It looks weird. 00:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Looks AMAZING! ^^ The eyes should be a bit more yellow/orange though, they look almost brown right now and they're supposed to be amber. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:19, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. 00:24, July 13, 2011 (UTC)D Darken the head stripes. 02:10, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Blur the shading. 02:12, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Blur the earpink. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:02, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Blur the markings on the head. 19:59, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. 00:06, July 19, 2011 (UTC) There's a white speck in the bald spot on his haunch. 00:09, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Blur the stripes a bit more. 15:45, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. 00:27, July 20, 2011 (UTC) In My opinion, I think the white muzzle looks like a highlight. Brighten the highlights on the haunch and chest as well. Besides those, I like it :) ♔  S u n s p i r i t  ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 07:50, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm supposed to tell you all that Rainlegs says Re-uploaded. 02:04, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Just darken his forehead stripes a bit, then this is more than ready. ;)  HA WK FI RE98  17:04, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (L) - Redone
Original artist is Mousetalon :3 Meh, I really hate this xP I'll probably darken the shading and ear pink later. 18:08, July 11, 2011 (UTC) You did take the colors off of her kit image, right? xD Blur the haunch shading. 19:10, July 11, 2011 (UTC) The changes aren't showing :P 19:30, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Fill in the whole ear with earpink. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  20:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC) The whole ear doesn't always need to be filled. It's the artist's choice. But yeah, Nighty, I think you should darken the shading :3 21:37, July 11, 2011 All I can say is darken the shading and remove the spot above her ear. Also, it might just be me, but her eyes look a little unfocused. Her left eye looks like it's looking up, while the right is looking at you. 01:37, July 12, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - Meh, changes aren't showing again x3 You'll know the changes are showing when there's no smudge above the ear :P 08:33, July 12, 2011 (UTC) I think you should fill the whole ear with ear pink,but if you dont want to I think you should at least make it triangular and not an upside-down V shape.But thats just my opinion...do what you like.Dovey Newbie! 15:27, July 12, 2011 (UTC) Yes filling the whole ear shouldnt be optional. The blanks designed to have the whole ear filled. 02:07, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Darken the tail shading. 02:16, July 13, 2011 (UTC) As Rainwhisper said, it's the artist's choice whether or not to fill in the entire ear. Also, I've seen plenty of approved leader chararts with the ear pink not filling the entire ear. 02:41, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Yes and im changing those right now. 02:46, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Did you darken the tail shading yet? :P 16:15, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Oh, and did you take the color off of her kit charart? that one has already been redone, so this one needs to match. 17:03, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Yep, I took them straight off the charart. Oh, and Reuploaded  23:46, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Good. =) Blur the bottom of the earpink. 01:09, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded  04:50, July 19, 2011 (UTC) It needs a grey nose.  05:03, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the highlight on the front leg.  15:49, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear part that indicates it. 02:02, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (W) - Redone
The earpink needed to be reshaped and darkend, and the orginal artist was Sparrowsong. I cleared up some blurred lineart. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  21:16, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Hmm, the earpink is too pink, and I think there's some blurred lineart on the front leg. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:38, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- there's not much I can do with the blurred lineart without redoing the whole image. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  00:21, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or the tail stripes darker than the rest of the stripes? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 19:04, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes touch the lineart, and I noticed that you used the spray paint can to do the stripes, but to keep that from happening, you should put the stripes on with a pencil and blur it at 100%. You could try smudging those circles into her pelt, but I dunno if it'll help :/ 00:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

I took the original image and just tweaked the earpink. I didn't make a whole new image. Anyways, it wasn't on the list to have a makeover, but with all the blurred lineart, it looks bad. Should I leave it as it is, or remake it? Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Probably remake it. Otherwise it would be hard to fix the blurred lineart. 15:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- is it just me, or is the earpink really pink? Mintstar  This time for Africa!  01:32, July 14, 2011 (UTC) It kind of is. I think the stripes are too dark... 16:34, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- does it look okay without highlights? Mintstar  This time for Africa!  01:33, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like the queen's version. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  19:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- I know the stripes are blue-gray, but that's what they were on the queen version. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  23:22, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Add one more stripe on the tail. Love it! ^^ Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 16:50, July 17, 2011 (UTC) I like how you redid the stripes. Looks more natural now, And I also like how you did it to make it look actually silver with the shading and stuff. But enough with that, define the earpink -- Reuploaded- I blurred the earpink, but it looks odd. Anyways, the stripes on the tail are fine as they are. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  23:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still is hard to see...define it more. 16:05, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights more consistent. The shoulder highlight looks brighter than the others. 19:22, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I can change the highlights if they look off. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  14:49, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add a stripe near/in her neck area. It looks empty to me. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:38, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:50, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hazelstar (L) - Tweaked
Added stripes. Orginal artist: Honeyfur Darkhallows   Enter the cave? 02:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Darken the shading. 02:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Make the earpink fill in the Whole ear --

Reuploaded 'ah, I'm finally getting the hang of smudging in photoshop :D. About time. ' Darkhallows' Enter the cave? 03:21, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Define the shading a tad bit more, and blur it on the haunch :) 05:23, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Okay, now smudge the earpink and maybe add shading inside to the inside of it, or atleast darken it -- Great work! Darken the earpink a bit more, and smudge it into the ear.  18:13, July 13, 2011 (UTC) The shading looks fine to me, but it can be blurred on the haunch. And darken the shading on the tail. Mintstar   This time for Africa!  01:31, July 15, 2011 (UTC) There's a couple of extra spots above his ears.  03:14, July 18, 2011 (UTC) This hasn't been uploaded in...6 days.  16:08, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) ~ Tweaked
-- Shading needed to be blurred. Original artist is none other then Nightfall. Comments?  Law liet  Li ght 03:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC) I think it needs to be blurred a little more. (*cough*Light > L*cough* :P) Darkhallows   Enter the cave? 03:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. (In your dreams, perhaps. xD)  Law liet  Li ght 03:57, July 13, 2011 (UTC) On the tail, I can't tell if they're supposed to be stripes, but it looks like leaked lineart to me. 04:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC) It was leaked lineart. Sorry about that. =/ Fixed.  Law liet  Li ght 04:13, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Blur the haunch shading more. 16:20, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. Does it look better? <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> ℓαω ℓιєт  Li ght 19:44, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail shading a bit... 01:27, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> ℓαω ℓιєт  Li ght 01:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Blur the shading and earpink. Nice job, Cloudskye! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:04, July 15, 2011 (UTC) I'm not touching the earpink. It only said the shading needed to be tweaked, not the ear pink. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> ℓαω ℓιєт  Li ght 02:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> ℓαω ℓιєт  Li ght 02:42, July 15, 2011 (UTC) The lineart is blurred in a couple of places. 18:38, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 18:55, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I think the shading at the top of the neck/chest can be blurred a bit more. 16:11, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 21:01, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading in between the haunch and the... shoulder, I think. So basically the stomach, I guess. :3 14:29, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hollowpaw (A) - Tweaked
Added the white belly. Original artist: Hawktalon Darkhallows   Enter the cave? 03:39, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Blur a bit more where the white meets the brown. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Li ght 03:57, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Nice! there's a strip of white right next to the arm/front leg, so make that match in color :) 04:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Great job! Blur the white part more.  16:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Woo. ;3 Smudge the white, a bit, too. Andmake the earpink smaller.  01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Looking good!  16:07, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 17:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Shading fail. Anyways, Here's Mousefang. I redid the shading, but I don't think I like the pattern. Might choose another pattern for this one. Anyways, comments? 05:18, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Oh!

And I believe the original artist was Shaf Girl :) 05:20, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

All I can say is define the shading alittle and make the earpink fill in the ear correctly--

The eye is misshapen, blur shading on the chest, thicken shading on the haunch a tad, make the earpink proper, and I'm pretty sure you're supposed to shade/highlight the tail the other way.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 06:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Plus, the erpink looks a little missapen at the bottom, and the chest shading needs to go on the chin as well. The eye color is too neon. 14:02, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur teh shading on the chest. 16:49, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could, darkened eye, fixed eye, darkened earpink, lightened shading at some parts, fixed tail shading, added chin shading, fixed anglement of the earpink...and... yeah. xD 17:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. :P 19:29, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Changes were showing, but not anymore. It stopped showing the changed before those two past comments, but it wouldn't let me edit xD 00:03, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, changes are showing again. Sorry I was at the beach all day, re-comments? 01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy. Would you like me to help as I did with Whitewing, or can you do it? <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:05, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her neck. Looks great otherwise~ Chell;  Aperture Science Test Subject.  19:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Mintstar: I'm sorry that you're doing all this for me ^^' You don't have to blur it though, but thanks anyways :D Getting a new computer soon, it will be great starting from scratch.. 19:09, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, just blue the earpink a tad more~ Chell;  Aperture Science Test Subject.  20:41, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :D 00:54, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink still looks kinda crooked --

Re-uploaded. 03:21, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading under the ear and the stomach shading where the haunch meets the upper body, close to the back. 03:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 21:53, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:27, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading looks a little too concentrated, if you know what I mean. Maybe it's just me ♔  S u n s p i r i t  ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 07:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix it. Just letting everyone know that the changes are no longer showing. 16:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, and I don't think blurring it will help. Try redoing it? <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:48, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Icecloud (A) ~ Redone
Original artist was Icethroat21. I redid her as a long hair. You'll have to go to her history page to see her current image, since it's only showing a flat image of her as a short haired apprentice. 13:39, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

I can see her as a long haired. The shading is a little hard to see, so can you define it ever so slightly? I know white cats don't have dark shading, though. 14:26, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink, I can barely see it. 15:00, July 17, 2011 (UTC) You mean darken the earpink, and it almost looks like there's no shading or highlights.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 01:47, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpnk. Great work! 01:56, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could on pixlr. I'll try to blur it more later. 06:31, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source...and blur the shading. ;D 17:46, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and the highlights seem....off....Is it my laptop or what? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 03:03, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, it does look off. I'll go fix it now. 03:27, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did it again. I'll blur it more latetr. 04:35, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing...... 13:19, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Rainey, but maybe darken the shading a bit. It's a tad hard to see right now. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:33, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:07, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good ;3. Lighten the shading on the base of her tail. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great, but the end of the tail looks lighter than the charart itself. Maybe darken it a bit? 20:13, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (D) ~ Redone
Original artist - Bramble; Redone - longhair. 17:11, July 18, 2011 (UTC) And, don't tell me to blur the shading, because I've blurred it as much as possible. 17:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Darken the scars' colour. 18:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I got it off of his other charart. Not changing that, or the earpink color, or the pelt color. 19:03, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I got my charart's color from his warrior, but I'm changing it. Tweak Week is supposed to make them look better, so I think you should change it. Also make the pelt color a little more blue-gray. 19:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC) It is blue-gray, but I'll make it a little bluer. 19:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC) RE-Uploaded' but changes aren't showing... 19:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC) He was also called gray, light gray, and dark gray, so I don't see why it should be so blue. 19:44, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Blur highlights. Wild   breath   21:26, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I said already; I've blurred it as much as possible. 21:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Can you try blurring just a tad more? It doesn't need to blurred a lot more, anyways. Add some shading to the front back leg. Also make the scars more noticeable. :3 15:42, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. 16:38, July 19, 2011 (UTC) In the space between the haunch and the front leg the pelt seems to be lighter than the rest of the pelt. Can you maybe add shading there or make it so it matches the rest of the pelt? 20:51, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded 23:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Grrrr...changes still won't show. 23:14, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back legs. 19:27, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail (MCA) ~ Redone
Original artist was Minnowclaw, and I redid it as a tabby. My other charart has gone through 24 hours after an upload without any comments to fix anything, so I decided to put this one up. Comments? 22:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ooohhh, pretteh! Blur the markings on the leg, just a tad though. 22:50, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks ^^ Blurred (re-uploaded) 23:02, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Does this mean his kit and apprentice art are also being redone? 03:14, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I think so. I do believe we decided to give all ginger cats stripes. 03:15, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular and move it up a little bit. Define some of the stripes. :3 15:37, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''I hate apprentices' earpink... 17:16, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing, so you'll have to look at the image on the file page. Its the one with the good earpink... 17:53, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near the shoulder and darken the earpink. :3 20:53, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:33, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpin? It's kinda hard to see. 01:29, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, most ginger cats are tabby. Not all, but most. Hmm, the stripes look a bit unnatural to me. Maybe blend them a tiny bit? 19:25, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little. Nice work! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:45, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Foxleap (A) ~ Redone
This looks stupid. xD Changes right now aren't showing (for me, at least) Go to the edit history if you really wanna see it. xD Original artist was Dawnfeather. 04:01, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, is pretteh. The ear pink looks hard to see though.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Voldemort: Harry, kiss <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">me! 04:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Blur the stripes more to match his warrior charart. 17:22, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is nice! The pelt looks a little bit more brown than in his warrior, that could just be me though. 00:21, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if changes are showing. 15:58, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (L) - Tweaked
Ugh... I've had this done for awhile, but wasn't sure about the neck. Anyways, the shading was blotchy, the eye was altered, earpink looked off, and the original artist was Shimmerpool. If it's blotchy, I can remove the highlights. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  15:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

She needs silver round her muzzle.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Voldemort: Harry, kiss <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">me! 15:02, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I just highlighted the muzzle. Reuploaded. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, I think it was supposed to be that way, But tweak it if you want x) smudge the earpink and add shading to the front left leg -- 17:27, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the highlights on the tip of her tail to give her a silver tail tip? She has one ;3. Also make the earpink less....flouresent. More naturual. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Her eyes need to be a lighter coulor. In the first book, it mentioned her eyes being "ice blue". 18:21, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

There's a couple of specks over her ears. Otherwise, it looks fine to me. 19:24, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- forgot the silver tail-tip, but does it look fine? <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:25, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (K) - Redone
Original artist was Icestorm. He needed to look like his other images, so I just took the colors from his apprentice image. I changed the earpink though. Also the changes aren't showing yet. 15:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I am not sure if this is Stormkit or Crookedkit, if it is Crookedkit then make his jaw well crooked.... You want to make it unique.... The more unique the more people remember it and say "That artist is the best" !!!! Oh and make the eyes look forward not to the side. Cute but could be cuter..... 17:28, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The jaw is the only comment that is constructive. It should be taken into consideration. 17:35, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't know if I should give him a crooked jaw or not because he was seen without one, but I guess someone will make him a charart without a crooked jaw as Sormkit once Tweak Week is over. I'll reupload this in a little bit. :) -- 19:30, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (A) - Redone
Original artist was Echoheart, and she needed to be long-haired. 15:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but you should lighten the shading a bit. 19:22, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W)~ Tweaked
Original artist was Icestorm. The ears needed to be torn. I wasnt sure if i shouldgive her snaggly teeth, more scars, and messy fur like Thistleclaw, what do you guys think? 19:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lineart on the torn ears thicker. Along with your suggestions, all her chararts should depict her with a broad, flattened, Persian-like face (Vicky confirmed to me that she is of Persian decent) 19:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy on the flattened muzzle, but skip out on the long teeth. If Stonetooth's art doesn't depict his long teeth, this one shouldn't either. 19:49, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (K)~ Redone
It needed to be a tabby. Original artist was Echostar. 19:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the head and tail 19:50, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Weaselfur (W) - Tweaked
Well, original artist was Sandy, the shading needed to be blured, and because all the other ginger images needed stripes, heck, I gave him stripes too ;3. Comments? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  22:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

=Discussion Area= Use this area to post join requests, questions, and general discussion.

New Project
Please comment on this: Forum:New Project. 01:11, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (W) ~ New
My first image; Graypool as a warrior. Patch101 01:23, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Sorry, its tweak week, so you can't put up regualar chararts. 02:05, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Can I put it back up for acception when Tweak Week ends? (When is that?) Patch101 02:28, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Check the guidelines for rules on posting. But for future reference, the image looks fine, just work on the eyes. She has no pupils. 03:15, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Well, when tweak week is over, you'll be added in as a kit I suppose. Kits cannot post chararts until they've served a month being that rank, then you'll be able to post chararts as a warrior :) 03:41, July 10, 2011 (UTC) As an apprentice, actually. xD  05:41, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Whoops, error xD  16:43, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join?
I don't now how to shade on MS Paint, but I'll figure that out soon so please can you add me as a kit until I know? I'm also a total drama fan by my siginature. Go Team Noah 03:34, July 11, 2011 (UTC) A lead will add you in soon. :) I don't think you CAN shade in MS paint, but you can use Pixlr, or download Gimp (it's free and safe, don't worry). And sign with four ~'s. Just type four of them at the end of your post and it will sign for you. Very simple. ^^ ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥

And Sumopaint is good also. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Can I join?? I dunno how shade on GIMP. -- 01:33, July 12, 2011 (UTC) Sure! Just wait for a lead to add you in :) You'll be added as a kit, not being able to post a charart until you've served for a month :) As for GIMP, I reccomend if you do not know how to use that, to use Pixlr, Sumopaint or even Photoshop :) 02:54, July 12, 2011 (UTC) I looked at Ivyheart's Charart Tutorial and I figured out how to shade and I am getting pretty good!-- 14:37, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, can I join, please?
Hi, can I join as a apprentice, please? Amberfur 21:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Sure, you can join, just wait 'till a lead will add you in. But, you will be added in as a kit, kits can't do charats, but they can comment on them :) Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Hi i reaallyreally want to join. CAn i? Scarface9lives howl for the moon 14:12, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Charart

 * So, yes, I fail. While approving Rainwhisper's Spottedleaf's image, I accideantly forgot I copied pasted it and approved Lionblaze instead. I couldn't undo the Lionblaze edit to get back at the Spottedleaf edit, so should I just leave it like that since Spottedleaf's current image would currently replace the old one? 22:01, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ooh, that's bad. Um, maybe a lead should decide. That's all I got :P Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:58, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Cant you find all the coding in the history? 00:36, July 13, 2011 (UTC) You should be able to. Its not hard, just go to the edit and find the edit differences, and copy-paste it, and add it right back. 17:48, July 13, 2011 (UTC) I can only edit one line a time, and it's so complicating. But no, I cna't. It keeps saying, "cannot undo due to conflicting interedimate edits" 23:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hi can I join PCA?
Hi Im Sparrowpool and I was wondering if I could join PCA Thanks! Sparrowpool 14:33, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Sure, but a lead will have to add you in. You'll be added as a kit, so you can't do chararts for a month and only comment on images. 21:10, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Okay thanks! Sparrowpool 22:05, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please comment on
this forum regarding setting up rules for the new chat room. 22:22, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Question about Leafstar's images
Ok, I know I put my question in the incorrect place last night, where nobody could see it, so I'm just making a new section for it. On the Nominations page, I had originally put Leafstar's images down as needing cream (I DON'T see cream anywhere on her images), and somebody chnged it to just needing cream stripes. I'm confused as to how she has cream on her: I mostly wanted to clear that up, because I'm doing her queen image, but it'll be hard to make it match if she's not tweaked for the right thing. 16:07, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

There are cream blotches along her haunch, her back, her fore-head, her tail, her stomach, and her left fore-leg. I really like how this is, the cream is nice and soft. I never pictured her with cream blotches patched all over her, I think it was supposed to be much more subtle Night Fall 19:14, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like brownish-ginger to me. Berrynose is cream. 20:17, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well it blends into her pelt more and it looks pretty cream against the brown. It doesn't have to be like Berrynose cream, then it would look kind of odd and stand out too much in my opinion. 17:13, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like highlights to meWildfire 02:34, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Not to me. Highlights are brighter tones of the pelt, but the cream here isn't at all the shade of brown. I think Rainwhisper is right, if we did each cat with the same color of cream, then they wouldn't stand out as individuals. I think every cat that has cream on their fur has a different and unique shade of it. I think she's beautiful as she is Night Fall 02:37, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, usually when a cat is cream and tabby it means that their stomache and muzzle are totally cream, such as the white on Billystorm. I think the character art is nice, but the cream is unnatural. 19:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Joining
Can I join, please? I think I'm pretty good at chararts. :3 She-Lizardstorm (Talk ^^) 18:58, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, I'll add you in. Take a look at our guidelines for the rules, and maybe some tutorals too. You'll be added in as a kit so you won't be able to post a charart for a month; you'll still be able to comment though. :3 00:52, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo)
Can I do Mitzi (Lo)? The book is out, and I know what she looks like, even though nobody has changed her page up so that it says what she did in Crookedstar's Promise. This is my first real wiki charart. I've practiced a lot. I'm ready, I'm sure. May StarClan light your path... 12:59, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hi Hazelwing! Just so you know, you have to join the project first. You'll be added in as a kit and you have to wait one month before you can put up chararts for approval. 13:13, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

If nobody has reserved her when you become an apprentice, then you may do her art. 13:17, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nobody's reserved her, and I've been added as an apprentice. PLEASE????? When Tweak Week ends...and, sign with a signature. (-Oakfeather, The ultimate Warriors Fantard 17:18, July 20, 2011 (UTC)) 17:56, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Can I Join?
Hi my username is Firestar1122000 (my sig is complicated sorry just search firestar1122000 in the wiki seach) and i was wondering if I can join PCA and PC. It seems so fun and i would love to make Chararts! Thanks 17:04, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ello. I'll add you in right now. Make sure to check the guidelines before you get started. We're in the middle of Tweak Week right now, and you'll be added in as a kit, so you won't be able to do Chararts. 18:31, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can I?
Can I join? PLEASE!!❀ѕιℓνєяωнιѕкєя❀ 18:15, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

silverwhisker I also want to join!!! I wanted to make my own charart as Huntingclaw. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE???????????????????????????? Huntingclaw 13:32, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Huntingclaw I'll add you both in. Take a look at our guidelines for the rules and any questions. Also, we're in the middle of Tweak Week. You'll also be added in as a kit so you won't be able to do chararts for a month. :3 00:43, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

May I join?
Hi, im RoseStar15 and i would like to know if i could join. I am sorry for trying to do a charater for fleck. I ddnt know you had to join this group 1st. I am asking this request becuase i enjoy the warrior series and i want to help expand the thought and appearences of the cats that are not known. Thank you for your time. User: (RoseStar)/Sig 15:07, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Of course you can join, RoseStar. A lead will add you in when they can. You'll have to be added in as a kit though, which means you can't post your own charart, but you can comment on others. If you're stuck, I recommend reading the guidelines before doing anything! Also, we have tutorials in case you need help. =D 19:30, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in. Thanks for your interest in joining! :3 00:46, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelflame ~ Rejoin Request
So, Squirrelflame told me that she wanted to rejoin the project, and said that I should write the join request for her, so here it is. Since she already had put a charart up, but it was declined, and she had been an apprentice when she left, she would like to come back as an apprentice, but if it has to be kit, its fine. She was part of this project for over a month before she quit it, and she never quit the wiki, I think she should be added back as an apprentice. 19:26, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hay. ;3 Anyways, if needed, read the guidelines once again. But she has to be added back as a kit. I'll add her in now. 19:32, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

And now I'm quitting again. Yes, I know, I can never make up my mind. :P But still, I'm quitting, so take me off the list. 18:55, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

You are seriously pointless. You shouldn't leave just because you're a kit. I know its horrible that you were an apprentice and now you went back down in the ranks, but, seriously, have some perseverance. 19:02, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Alright then... xD I'll remove you. 22:54, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't say I wanted to leave because I had to be a kit. I just wanted to leave for my own reasons. Stop assuming things before you know the actual truth. 01:51, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Seriously, guys? Take your squabble somewhere else. No one wants to see it. 18:10, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hey can I join?
Hi Im Firestar1122000 and I was wondering if i caould become a kit in this awesome project. I think im pretty good at chararts. (my profile pic is mine) I really want to join. Thanks! http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Firestar1122000 15:52, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in as a kit. Take a look at our guidelines for the rules and some tutorals for help. Welcome to the project! ;3 22:53, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Character - For Approval
Hi everybody this is my first charart and I'm putting it up for approval! 00:23, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, you don't post your own characters, you put up characters based from the real Warriors books. This will be declined, sorry. Snowdazzle¹²³Lets count numbers! 02:13, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, for future reference, don't save images as JPEGs. It causes pixalization. Only save as PNGs. 16:40, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Leaving
I probably won't be contributing to this project any longer. I haven't worked on a charart in months, and I don't think I will anytime soon. So can someone remove me from the members template? Thanks! 15:13, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (K)
Here is Sandkit. I did the stripes in the same style as on Sandstorm (even though I don't like that style very much, I wanted it to match).

The earpinks might need to be changed, and maybe more shading. -Oakfeather, The ultimate Warriors Fantard 17:16, July 20, 2011 (UTC) You can join, but a lead will have to add you in. But you'll be added in as a kit, and kits can't do chararts for a month. You can only comment on images. 14:26, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Okay, thank you. :D Purplebuneary 04:11, July 16, 2011 (UTC)MudkitPurplebuneary 04:11, July 16, 2011 (UTC) It's still in italic or something is it just my computer? Wild fire  22:09, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Are you still having that problem, Wildfire? If so, it may be your computer. Mudkit, make sure to sign with four ~'s, it makes it easier for us to contact you. Also, if nobody else shows an interest in doing Birdpaw before you become an apprentice, you may be able to do that charart. But for now, I'll have to put the delete tag on it. 00:09, July 16, 2011 (UTC) Okay Purplebuneary 04:11, July 16, 2011 (UTC)MudkitPurplebuneary 04:11, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Waiting for a new charart
Are there any new chararts to do or any chararts that need doing again? I have been in this project for some time now and I haven't had the chance to do one! CloverBlondestar There are lots more chararts to do since Crookedstar's Promise and The Rescue came out, but Tweak Week is already underway, so you'd have to wait until August to reserve a charart. Sorry. But you could still comment on the images. 14:25, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Yeah, I really want to do Beetlenose. CloverBlondestar You'll probably get to do Beetlenose since nobody showed a real interest in doing his charart. 20:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC) I've already done an image of him, just can't put it up for approval. CloverBlondestar

Forum
Please comment on this forum regarding setting up rules for the new chat room. 22:22, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join?
Hi! I was wondering if I could join. I'll need to learn how to make character Art though. HollyleafOfThunderclan 00:02, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Sure, a lead will add you in. You'll be added in as a kit, so you can only comment on images for a month. And, if you want to learn how to do charart, you can always look at apprentice tutorials and make some practice ones. 14:53, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Thanks!! HollyleafOfThunderclan 20:13, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Also, you can do a practice image as your one personal image, then talk to one of this project's members on their talk page and ask if it's ok. I'd be happy to help you if you did that, to help you learn :) 20:39, July 15, 2011 (UTC) I'll add you right now. I suggest looking at the basic guidelines and some tutorials before commenting on a charart. Thank you for your intrest in joining.  18:26, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

I can't figure out how to get to a place where I can make charart! Can somebody help me?! HollyleafOfThunderclan 20:17, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join the project?
I really want to join this project. I like to do pictures (like my avatar). I can't use GIMP, but Pixlr.com, and I've already practised to do some pics. Sure, a lead will add you in. You'll be added in as a kit, so you can only comment on images. And it's good to practice some pics, I know I practice quite much. 14:55, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Also, please sign with four ~'s so we know who you are 20:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-joining~
Well, since I've decided to rejoin the wiki, might as well join PCA again~ How I've missed this project~. Also, since I was a warrior when I left, do I have to join in as a kit? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  18:59, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. :3 Warriors are still warriors. Welcome back! 18:02, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Portal, yes? Welcome back ^^. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 04:15, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

yeppers~. Portal's an awesome game. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  14:16, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Rejoining! Ready to make Charart!
Hi, Hawkey here. :) Same as above. ^ I was a warrior when I left, can I be a warrior still? Thanks so much!  HA WK FI RE98  18:09, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, I'll add you in. ;D Welcome back! :3 18:16, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Talk Page
Something seems to be wrong with the talk page. Whenever I edit something, and I think this happens to anyone who edits anything on this page, all of the comments and things get jumbled together. So.. um, does anyone know what's going on? xD 14:40, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm having the same issue. I think someone's signature got messsed up. 14:46, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Suggestion
I realize it may be too late, but I think Weedwhisker's art should be tweaked... he looks like a pair of bad pajama pants. I think the white flecks should have been handled better. 16:38, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think that's on the list, right? Last time I checked, it was. It looks sorta cool. 8D Like a disease, but yeah, anyways, it should be tweaked. xD 16:40, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

He's on there. Just checked~ ;3. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:42, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Questions:
Hello! I have a couple questions. First, when is Tweak Week going to end? Second, where is the list of chararts that need tweaking or being completely redone! Please comment. Thanks.  HA WK FI RE98  17:30, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

The Tweak Week nominations are here :) 19:16, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

August 7 ;) 19:18, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

It might go longer. We have a a lot of images left to be done, and i doubt we can finish most by the 7th. 19:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I would strongly press for an extension. If we keep going at this rate, we'll never finish. 20:08, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree with Moonflight. I've already done four chararts, and I still don't think that's enough. 20:16, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Promotion?
I'm pretty sure I've been here a month. Can I be promoted to apprentice? I'd really like to start contributing art. 19:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

If you tell us the date you were added as a kit, then they will probably add you (unless they have some hidden stash of dates that I don't know about haha) 19:59, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Not yet, Shellheart. You've only been a part of the project since July 9th. You'll have to wait. =( 20:15, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, Shellheart! You're almost there! ^_^ 21:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)