Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Nettlepaw (A) - For Approval
My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? -- ♥Shine star♥  19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar ♥Shine ]] star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

oh my star clan! i am soo annoyed! i can't find my nettlepaw file on my computer! -- ♥Shine star♥  21:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Did you try a search? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:33, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

ya -- ♥Shine star♥  17:56, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Can't you just copy and paste the image from here?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 18:10, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Uhh...you could just save the image to your computer again. (i think that's what Ashshadow meant.) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:16, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah it is sorry I wasn't clear.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:21, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I tried doing that but it comes out all blurry! -- ♥Shine star♥  15:58, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry but it sounds like you'll have to start over.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:14, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, I'm already trying, just give me a little while to get a new one -- ♥Shine star♥  15:12, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, heres my new nettlepaw, now he needs more work but at least i have something to work WITH. Comments? -- ♥Shine star♥  15:56, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the eye like on my tutorials, and add shading, if it's there I can't see it. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 16:51, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, i'll get on that soon, my big sis is on the desktop right now. and also, on this computer the tabby stripes look all bad, and icethroat, do you think i should redo my tabby stripes the way it says so on your tutorials, or the way it is already? and it sort of confuses me on the eye thing on your tutorials. -- ♥Shine star♥  00:19, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

please work on this or it will be declined--Echopaw 01:21, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw what are you talking about it was just updated.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:30, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

No, your stripes are fine! I'm not very good at those type of stripes, so I didn't bother making a tutorial for them, that's all. and the eye thing, each block is like a pixel, if that helps any. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:03, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, i'll get on it soon, its just that i'm at my cousins for New Years and i'm sleeping over there so my work is on my computer at home. I'll get back on him soon though! -- ♥Shine star♥  16:23, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Also, ice, when i do my new shading, (cause mine you CANNOT see) should i just do it over the tabby stripes or remove them, shade, then put them back on? -- ♥Shine star♥  16:35, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Go over the tabby stripes. The shading should be on both the stripes and the fur. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 18:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

ya, i'm working on it, its just really hard for me to do the eyes! i'll have a new one up soon though! promise! -- ♥Shine star♥  17:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval


Heheh, she's so nice. :-) One of the images is about to be deleted, so it wont be 36 for long. Comments? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:29, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Agreed. Poor Minty! Anyway, onto the image, I think you need to blur the highlights a bit more, and maybe lighten the ear pink. But, otherwise, she looks awesome, Mumble! -- Angelstar Silver Bells 19:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! I'll get onto that ASAP. ;-) -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 19:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I think Nightfall101 had her already! i swear! but this is good Mumble!--Echopaw 21:15, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm... I know it says she's a queen on her page, but she isn't really. If she needed an image, she would be a loner. She had her kits as a loner, and the term queen is only used in Clans, just as kit-mother is used in the Tribe. Other loner/rogue she-cats who had kits aren't classified as queens, such as Sasha. It would be different if this was like Daisy, who had her kits and then joined a Clan, but Minty never joined or will join a Clan. So I don't think she should have a queen image, but a loner image instead. Please correct me if I'm wrong. -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 21:41, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I see where you're coming from Bluestar but the definition of queen is any she-cat expecting or nursing kits. As for the image it's really good but I agree with Angelstar.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome Mumble! But I do agree with Bluestar. I think she should have a loner blank rather than a queen blank. Oh and Echo, yes, I did have her reserved for a while, but I had never done a loner before, and when I tried doing Minty, it didn't turn out so good. So, I decided to let someone else do her--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I discussed my view on this with Bluestar; you can see on her talk page. The bottom line is that this is the correct blank; she-cat nursing kits or pregnant is a queen, thus she be used with a queen blank. Tinsel claw  22:22, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

When I checked nobody had reserved her...? I'm gonna take a look at the discussion, and decide what to do about the blank, but I think I might stick with the queen; A queen is really just a pregnant or nursing she-cat. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:44, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Blurred her more, kept the blank the same. Anything else? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of dark, but that's just my opinion. Ignore me if you think the color is good. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 16:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. I'll lighten it up a tad, as well as the shading. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 16:25, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Sorry it took so long, I was busy. Lightened the ear pink, but left the shading alone. Anything else? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 22:51, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks nice.Lighten the shading a tad,please. '''FirePelt  01:22, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

kk. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

UPLOADED. That's the best I could do. :P -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:21, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

It looks better!(Shading wise,everytihng else is perfect)You are a talented artist I have to tell you that!(^=._.=^) '''FirePelt 02:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! ^-^ -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:28, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's still too dark in places and I can't see the lineart - the base of her tail, her belly and some areas on her chest and shoulders. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:30, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Mumble, let me say i like you image, but this blank is for a clan queen. Minty is a loner/rough queen, but i'm not sure we need to do anything about it. -- ♥Shine star♥  00:45, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Shineh (can i call you that for now) it really dosn't matter BTW it's not rough its rouge don't worry every body gets it wrong! Echopaw 01:16, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

It was agreed that a queen is a queen and the same blank will be used for all queens, clan, rogue, ancient, tribe. Sa nd  y!  10:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, for the Tribe of Rushing water? They call their queens Kit mothers. I thought we'd need serperate blanks for them--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:23, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

See the Rising Moon section in the approved archives - Bramble has said that seeing as there are only two kit-mothers mentioned, we will add mud streaks to the current blanks. Also, please work on this Mumble, or it will be declined. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  22:27, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I am. I'll get her put up soon. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 00:25, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

UPLOADED. I got sick of her and just completely redid it. xD -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 21:31, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, I kinda liked the other one better. But as for this one, blur the highlight in the middle a lot--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) - For Approval
My first tabby. I did the best I could. I really want this approved by Christmas. Please! Comments before Christmas? --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:28, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe more shading and some more stripes.-- Darkhallows 12:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink more, add more shading and blend, darken the tabby sttipes, and add more tabby stripes. Also, make them a little more wavy and not strait y's.--Minnowclaw 17:55, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Wait I am too lazy to put the Reuploaded sign up. Wait I just did! --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks messy. Blur it and add highlights to the head and tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Try adding some tabby stripes to the face, and make them less of a pattern of Ys but soe squggly lines, some Ys, and some little dashes in between the lines.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  20:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Um I don't get what your saying. Help? -- Pan dast orm Panda Love 21:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Icestorm, she means that the stripes are shaped liked 'Y's. Add a line in between some of them and make them smaller. Maplefern Hi!14:09, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whole image re-done. I also tried a diffrent style of shading. Any more comments? --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:13, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I would probably blur the shading a little more, and make the stripes a little longer. Also, add some stripes to the legs. But other than that, it looks great!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:34, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Do I really have to? I was thinking of adding some lines and I kinda like it how it is now. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:43, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Which do you guys like better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:46, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I like the one on the right better. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:13, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

The one on the right is better. All I can say is tone down the ear pink a little bit, blend the corners of it, and maybe add a little more shading? Should be good to go, then. (: -- Quiet !... 08:15, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

So the one on teh right? Tell me if the changes didn't show up. Oh and Quietstep can you reply to my friend requst? Thanks! I don't think the changes showed up.--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 18:44, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

The right one although the ear pink needs blurring (which, if done right, should dull the colour a little too as it will mix in with the brown), the stripes look very blotchy and blurred. Perhaps make them a solid colour and more defined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:49, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Can you tell me how to fix them? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tell me if the changes didn't show. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:13, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading more but be careful not to hit the stripes. Also - the ear pink needs to be more like Swallowtail (RC) or Lionheart or Weaselfur Sa  nd  y!  22:52, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Which one do you like better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:57, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 02:39, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

To be honest, I liked the best, but out of these two, I like the stripes on the one on the right, but I like the color on the one on the left better. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 04:12, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat. Try darkening the second one, as well as blurring the ear pink and the general pelt. It looks pretty good. -- Bramble -sama  18:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anymore comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 02:29, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes darker. Also, there's some extra lineart on the ear and the top of the head. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 18:09, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Can you get rid of it? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 18:15, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the stripes. Give me a sec to upload it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 18:19, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 03:52, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the ear pink a little. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 16:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 17:15, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? I need this approved! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 18:52, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add a couple of stripes to the head and paws, and add shading to the midriff. Also, it was only an hour and a half between your two comments, people will comment whenever they can get on. --  Icy -chan  20:05, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Millie(Q)- For approval
-- ok since whitewing is approved i thought i'd put up Millie. she is my first tabby! and i am quite proud of her. comments? <font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

Looks good. The thing is, The stripes should be thinner --Rainstripe c: 16:33, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, discounting the 3 discussion sections this just fits nto 35 images. The stripes need to be less cartoony; look at some aproved tabbies for reference. There are a few different styles you can try. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ears are too dark and need blurring. Sandy's right. The tabby markings are too thick, and could do with more blurring. --Birchy (I don't know how to get a signature!!)

The tabby stripes need to look more like Millie's stripes on her warrior image. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, the ear pink needs blurred, and fix the color; make it more like the color in Millie's warrior image. You don't need ear pink on the ear farthest from us (the left ear), so get rid of that. You need to make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image, and then blur the stripes. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 15:38, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image,please.Blur the ear pink,fix color,like her warrior image.Delete the farthest ear pink,it's not needed.I can see your proud to,everyone is for there first's of anything!-- '''FirePelt  02:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

ok with these comments i will redo her completely. she should be reuploaded in around 2 days,<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

This needs to be worked on or it will have to be declined. Also, please sign with ~ so the timestamp will be displayed. Thanks Sa  nd  y!  14:14, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploadedeven more proud!--<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!  17:43, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look much better but they're to dark. Lighten them some.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Shellheart(D)-For approval
My first official Char art. I like the way he turned out. Pretty Pretty c: Ready for approval! Comments? --Rainstripe c: 17:17, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

is it me or do i see a gray blurr on its chest ~iceyfang

Looks good! I would blur the shading, though, and the eyes need to have a glare and pupil. See Icethroat's tutorials for info on how to do the eye. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 18:08, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Bluestar1776.Blur the shading.I did the eye for you.(sorry if you get mad,I wanted to help you!) '''FirePelt 18:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt, you need to give users a chance to improve for themselves; this is Rainstripe's first charart afterall. Rainstripe and Iceyfang, please sign with ~. As for the image, it needs ear pink. Take a look at some tutorials for how to do this if you are stuck. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:38, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded with ear pink and more blur. --Rainstripe c: 18:55, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good, Ranstripe:D But, the ear pink should only be on one ear (the one that is on the side of the head that is facing us). --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 19:09, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded fixed ear pink. Ready for approval!!--Rainstripe c: 19:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

i still see gray on his chest Iceyfang 19:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Its shading. Durr --Rainstripe c: 19:31, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

No, I think I see it too, a paler grey - the shading should reach the lineart. Also, the ear pink needs to be smaller and a more rosy/salmon colour. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:34, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded. Fixed

Please remember to sign all of your posts with the four tildes(~). I see a shadow behind him. It shouldn't be there.-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 21:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded P: --Rainstripe c: 22:46, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

His back looks faded and that gray patch is still on the front of him.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:48, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Whole image redone. --Rainstripe c: 23:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

the eyes seem yo be life less can give the eyes a puil Iceyfang 23:59, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Check Icethroat21's tutorial for eye diagrams. The spots look. . . circular. Make them more uneven and natural, like on Brambleberry. The ear pink is way too large. Make it smaller and darker and blur it.-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 15:44, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Raineh 20:20, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

i think theres some gray in the open spots or it might be me Iceyfang 22:23, December 23, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

I see it too. Fix that and I think he'll be ready.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:13, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I dont understand. Mabie could you explain it more? --Raineh 13:44, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The space between his front and back legs is light gray. It needs to be transparent or atleast white.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 16:28, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Gorsetail (NP Warrior)-for approval
Here's Gorsetail...I'm pretty sure nobody's reserved him...so..how is he?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 18:40, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! --Raineh 00:13, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Very good job! Just darken the ear pink a little, so we can see it, and blur some of the highlights.--<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:16, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

reupladed -- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 19:17, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and then it should be ready. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:53, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

And try to make the ear pink not touch the lineart.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 20:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again I don't think it was ever touching the lineart(does it looks like it is?)-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 03:55, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks like it is, actually. Also, it still needs to be more of a reddish color. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 00:12, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

reupladed-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 00:40, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool- For Approval
my second charart...comments??-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  10:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


 * it needs more shading, all the tail is a good thing to do and the ear with out the earpink on it can have shading on it to, other then that for now I can't see any thing else. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:34, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


 * Is this charart leafpool? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This doesn't look much like her Medicine cat version Icecloud33 13:41, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Try to smudge and blur the tabby markings to make them look more natural. Otherwise, it's good! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 17:55, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Try to make it more of a sandy brown, as she probally got her fur color from Sandstorm. Make the chest white go up to her face, like in Leafpool's medicine cat image. The eyes also seem to be going off the lineart a bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 20:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  08:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the color is much better. But I still have a few things

1. The stripes on her back need to be connected to her back in some way

2. The stripes need to be blurred more

3. The white on her chest is still way to big

4. The white on her chest needs to stretch up to her face

5. The white on her paws should be smudged into her pelt and then blurred

Here's something you should do. Save Leafpool's approved medicine cat image, and then bring it up in your art program along with your image. That way you can make it as close as possible--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  12:05, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The pelt doesn't match Leafpool's medicine cat image. And the eye is freaking me out. Try looking at Stoneclaw on how to do the eye. Also she needs ear-pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:09, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:08, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Make it more like this:And the eplt dosent look like her medicine cat version. . '''FirePelt 16:09, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, it's getting better. But the color still isn't quite right. Try running the dogde tool over the entire image a couple of times, that ought to help. And the stripes are getting better too, but they look kinda sloppy--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I'd like to note that the thumb near the bottom is from Fire, not Ivy. :x -- Quiet !...  04:26, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I saved her medicine cat pic on my computer and erased the herbs,and I tried to put her chin on.You can tell.I put it on to show her what the pelt color is,where the white comes,and the tabby strpes. '''FirePelt 20:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

i'm proud of this one for sure!!!reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:43, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Her tabby stripes are too dark, sorry.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 18:06, December 29, 2009 (UTC)


 * The tabby markings are darker than the ones on the medicine cat image. The ear pinks are different too. Blend in the area where the white fur touches her tabby fur. Plus add some shading.<span style="font-family:Segoe Script; background:navy; color:silver; border: 2px dashed silver; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: silver">Shimmerpool 2010 on its way! :D

this is better reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:24, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be blurred. And the tabby markings look a little dark -- '''Icecloud33 16:10, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Her eye looks a little squished to me.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  19:05, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

i used color dropper.reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The color of the stripes is better, but they need to be blurred into the pelt. And also, Moss is right about the eye. Look on one of Icethroat's tutorials for help on the eye--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:44, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

thanks!! reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:01, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Still, the eye is freaking me out. Look at Brambleberry or Whitestorm or Stoneclaw on how to do the eye. Also darken ear pink. There's something about the stripes that's borthering me. I don't know what it is. But I will tell you when I've figured it out. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 03:05, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

reuploded-- *Ivy  spring!!*  03:16, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

REPLOADED-- *Ivy  spring!!*  07:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ivypool, please fix the eye like many users have said. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED-- *Ivy  spring!!*  04:03, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but the eye still looks nothing like the one on her warrior image, or any of the cats that Icestorm suggested for reference. Also, you need to blur the white way more, you need to lighten and blur the ear pink, darken the shading a little, and blur the stripes some more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 05:13, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Crag where eagles nest(CG)-For Approval


This is my first ever cave guard.I'm not shure about the mud streaks though.Comments?Critque?Questions?Help? '''FirePelt 05:06, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

You need to color the space between his legs and right now he looks kind of black. Lighten him a little. As for the mud, it looks kinda shiney(cant think of a better word)-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 15:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on it as soon as I come back from shopping,prob wont be able to work on it till about,4 o' clock,eastern standered time. '''FirePelt 18:53, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Also, darken the ear pink. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 19:43, December 24, 2009 (UTC)Icestorm!

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt 02:10, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Add somemore shading, and blur the brown streaks.-- Darkhallows 15:07, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt 15:38, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the earpink,shading, and mud some more. This is very good.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:08, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs to be thicker and blurred more as I can barely see it. Sa nd  y!  22:18, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else at all? '''FirePelt 23:51, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Make the earpink more salmony. Maplefern 22:09, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else at all? '''FirePelt 22:35, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Earpink is to light but the nose is good. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!14:58, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.anything else?I fixed the ear pink.Anything else at all? '''FirePelt 15:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The shading still looks too thin to me, and the ear pink and nose too bright. Look at the approved image of Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits to see which colour to use. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  17:31, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded,Anytihng else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 17:57, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Molepelt (MC) For Approval
Did I go over the image limit? If I did, feel free to remove. I just did this for fun. Still waiting for comments on Ryewhisker. Anyways how is he? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:58, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Neat! I really like it. Maybe make the medicine stuff in his mouth a darker green, so it looks more natural. Otherwise, it's awesome! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 23:15, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I love it Icy! But I think you should probably blur the shading and highlights some, especially around the neck. But it's awesome!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:32, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

His ear pink seems to be a bit too bright - the shade is right, its just light. Highlights would make it seem like there's more shading, and the herbs would look better if all three were different shades(don't forget to shade them, too!). -- Quiet !... 08:08, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I had actually reserved him, but you keep this up; I still haven't got around to doing him anyways, haha. Also, merry Christmas! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:07, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

This is awsome! Darken and blur earpink and it should be good! Merry Christmas! 18:23, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with maple,darken and blur the ear pink. '''FirePelt 14:28, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Okay for some reason I can't get to pixlr.com. I'll try to get to this as soon as I can. Please don't decline! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whole image re done. Why you ask? I just wanted to! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 21:37, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

LOL! Okay, I think you should probably blur the shading a little more, and the ear pink looks a little too bright. Try and darken it some--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 03:03, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the midriff, like on Bluestar's deputy image, or like on Molewhisker and Silvermask. Also, darken all of the shading. --  Icy -chan  16:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Pebblefoot-For Approval
Here is Pebblefoot! Third Charart. It said that once you had one image approved, you could put up two. Correct me if I'm wrong. And I hope this isn't over 35. Anyway, comments? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!19:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The texture is great =) Just thicken and blur the shading, and blur the highlight on the face. Sa  nd  y!  22:24, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 22:46, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 23:22, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken all of the shading some more, and add some more to the tail. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:30, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maplefern 02:37, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!16:07, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Anything? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!01:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

He looks very bumpy. I know he's supposed to be mottled, but still. And most of the shading on the front legs and along the back, isn't even touching the lineart--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:48, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!00:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is a little better, but it still looks really bumpy to me. And the shading a long the tail looks very unnatural. Make the shading run along the lineart all the way up to the tip of the tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:17, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? Happy New Year! 22:41, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the tail looks better. But the shading on the front right leg is really bothering me. Try blurring it a lot--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:21, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Happy New Year! 21:28, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? Happy New Year! 17:19, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lionheart (D) - For Approval


Stormfur was just approved, so here's Lionheart. Fourth charart, second tabby, first deputy. I tried to make him as much like his warrior version as possible. Comments?

Side note: Everything, excluding the the front leg and tail, are made by Dawnfeather. I claim no credit to any of that. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 22:38, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look to brown. Make them more golden.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:11, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I just ran the dodge tool over all of it. Better? -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 23:20, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Make it look more like his warrior version:it looks nothing like it(stripes) and neither does the color. '''FirePelt 23:31, December 27, 2009 (UTC)



or the eyes Iceyfang 01:02, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Acually, the eye is fine. (I would make it a little brighter green, but you don't have to worry about that right now. Let's focus on his pelt first) If you look at his warrior and apprentice images on his article Iceyfang, you'll see that his eyes are green--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:04, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Iceyfang, I didn't make his warrior image, so I can't make an exact replica. I used the color dropper on the pelt, so it's the same color. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 01:45, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I think that when you used the color dropper you took color from where the shadind is because he isnt the same color this one is darker.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:52, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

And his eyes aren't green. I think that's what Iceyfang was trying to tell you.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 16:21, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

His eyes have been mentioned as being green and Bramble said it was okay on his apprentice pic so I think it's okay green.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 16:30, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

This is nowhere close to his warrior image, Bluestar. I know it's a different style to yours, but you have to try your best to replicate it as it's the image that was done first. That's what happens when you do a different rank for another charart. -- Bramble -sama  16:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I've got a crazy idea here. I'm going to save the Lionheart warrior image, bring it up it paint, then get the deputy blank, make the white transparent, paste the blank over the image, and the fix the spots like the tail and leg that wouldn't be colored. Should be done in about 10 minutes. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 17:01, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I know the tail and front leg look wierd, I'll fix it soon. What do you guys think? -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 17:53, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Really cool! But you're right about the leg and tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 17:57, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There, fixed leg and tail. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 18:36, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Is it just my computer or is there a shadow at the bottom. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 18:45, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

It's not just your computer, there's a shadow under the tail. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 19:25, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Whoa, hang on a minute! I'm not sure you can just use the paint job from the warrior image. You can copy it and use it to help, but you can't just paste the new blank over it... (Bramble?) Also, the lineart looks strange and square as if it's been altered. Sa nd  y!  21:04, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Hang on Sandy. I may be completely wrong about this, but I was looking over the approved charart archives the other day. I found Tigerstar's image, it was either his warrior image or his deputy image. I don't remember who made it though. But the user who made it, said that he/she copied the stripes from his warrior/deputy image, and pasted them onto his/her image.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:07, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Well, you're right of course - I checked it out and yes, Dawn did copy the stripes from the warrior image onto the deputy image, but the difference being she made both images... I'm gonna sit out on this one and let Bramble decide. Sa nd  y!  21:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't realize she had made both images--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:40, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Bramble and other leaders have stressed numerous times that you can not just copy one image and use it for another with minor variations. I'll wait for Bramble to decide, but I'm pretty certain that's the rule. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, an issue. I have to go in about two minutes, but I'll post a response as soon as I have time to get back on. Just pause this section for a little bit. :) Bramble  -sama  22:15, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, if it's going to be an issue, I'll just step down and let somebody who can make that style of tabby stripes do it. I thought my first one was pretty good, but oh well. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:31, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Wait a minute. I was looking at Tigerstar's page, and his warrior and deputy image have the exact same stripes. Just like these do. If his was fine, why isn't this one's? -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:34, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Just wait for Bramble to decide.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 16:59, December 29, 2009 (UTC)


 * See above as to why the Tigerstar stripes are not an issue. Bramble has said she will address this issue and she will. There's no point you withdrawing -you'll be able to make similar stripes, you just need to spend some time on them. Sa  nd  y!  17:40, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

I just read the section below; thanks so much. I'll fix the shadow soon. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 15:58, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Can someone help me with the shadow? I can't figure out how to get rid of it. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 20:52, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it for you. Hope you don't mind.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:07, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. Anything else? -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 22:37, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks odd around the tail - different to the blank:  Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  22:40, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 22:59, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eye more like his warrior image. Other than that I see nothing else. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 23:41, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Icy, that's how I do eyes. I can't do it any other way - it's to complicated! -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 23:44, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Like that. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 23:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine. Not everyone does them that way.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:59, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

It happened with my Whitestorm. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 00:03, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I guess its for consistency. It shouldnt be that hard to fix Raven(can I call you that?)-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 00:09, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? *crosses fingers in hope that somebody will say "comments before approval"* XD -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 02:39, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tail look more like it does on the warrior version. --  Icy -chan  16:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I can't. I'm not capable of doing those stripes, which is why I copied it. It was hard to do the tail as it is. I can't make this any better. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...just make it with diagonal stripes, then, but the horizontal line in the middle of the tail doesn't look in place. (If that makes any sense). --  Icy -chan  00:53, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Rain that Rattles on Stones (E) For Approval
Okay, this was hard to do. I've never done an elder with a muzzle "turned white from age". And I was planning on making the only visible eye like, closed, to indicate that it was missing. But I shied away from the idea after I started the image, and just made the eye blue. I'm probably gonna wait till I have more expeirence to do something like that. Okay well, here he is, Rain that Rattles on Stones!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:28, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Bllur the shading on the tail. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!01:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The muzzle looks like it is a feature of the pelt, not "turned gray from age." Blur it more, or remove it and instead add a paler shade of gray, and highlight it a lot.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  17:33, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the tail as much as I could, and is the muzzle any better? I tried smudging it a little, and then blurred it, then I added a few highlights--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:15, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The only thing I see is the muzzle; if it's gray with age, it should have the lightest white tinge next to the lineart and blurred a little inward. Right now it loks like his he just has a white muzzle. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not excatly sure I know what you mean Moss. If I tinged it white even more, wouldn't that make it look even more like just a white muzzle?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:49, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I think Moss means that it's too white now - the white bit should be smaller and should have a bigger gradient change colourwise. So my suggestion is that you remove the white muzzle you have now and then get a white paint brush with faded edges and use that to put the muzzle in and then blur the edges right into the pelt colour. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  10:19, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try that. It might be a while though. I looked at Graypool's image for how to do the gray muzzle, but I guess it makes a difference if the cat is brown, not gray. I'll get to work on it!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 17:40, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I tried that. The pain brush goes over the lineart, so it's extremely difficult to get it in just the right place without messing the lineart up. Any suggestions on how to do it without messing up the lineart?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:02, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Clawface (R) For Approval
I've been pretty busy for a while, and I just remembered that I have this image that I've been waiting to put on here after the number died down. So here ya go!--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:05, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is WAY to dark.Also,make the ear pink smaller and blur,blur,blur!The line art on one of the legs seems fuzzy. '''FirePelt 03:48, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Firepelt, you tell her to blur more.. Then say that the lineart is already blurred? That's not too helpful. :\ Anywho, back to the image. The shading isn't all that bad, just blur it in more and it should thin out(make it lighter/more blended). The ear pink should be a bit smaller, fix that by using a brush tool or the eraser(depending on whether or not you put it on a new layer). Also, the lineart on parts of the legs did get blurred. Also, though it might just be me, it seems as though you forgot to color his eye? -- Quiet !...  04:22, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

No,I mean try to Blur the shading.Not the lineart.She needs to FIX the lineart. '''FirePelt 04:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I never said to blur the lineart.. -- Quiet !...  04:30, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

No,I meant the Lineart LOOKS blurred.I said htat. '''FirePelt 04:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Whatever you said.....which leg?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The back front leg. '''FirePelt 15:45, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. His eye is colored, Quietstep.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  19:52, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

With all the shading on his body, maybe add a little to the top of his head? It just looks kinda barren up there. Especially since the ear farthest from us has shading--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 18:53, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval


'''((Well, I figured because there are a few images on 24 hours that this would be alright to post.. If not, please decline/withdraw/whatever this!))''' I've been waiting a while to try doing a blank set, and I finally got my chance. (: I tried to make it so there are no odd pixels(ones you'd miss with the fill tool). What do you guys see that needs to be fixed/changed? -- Quiet !...  00:09, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

I like them,but the mouth seems,odd to me.Here,I'll add a pic of when I saved this for a tester cat.I did'nt want to get all into detail,but I wanted to see how it would fill in,and how the shading would look.I think they look ok.I'll check them over some more. '''FirePelt 00:20, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, only the left ear should need pink. The right ear is facing the side, but both can have pink, I guess. As for the mouth, how does it seem odd to you? I might be able to fix it. -- Quiet !...  00:38, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

These look pretty good, but the tuft of hair, make it just a straight line (well, curved along the head line, but not with the extra fur) on the shorthairs, kind of like on the cave-guard blanks where the tuft of fur is only on the longhairs. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 01:05, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

They seem a little too chubby for a sharpclaw. They look more like kittypet blanks to me (not a bad thing, though, seeing as we need those).--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded the short haired blanks. Shaf, its probably because their belly isn't visible at all. Its hidden behind their hip and front leg. -- Quiet !...  01:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be me and not matter but it's hard to put tabby stripes on these. Again I dont think they're any tabby sharpclaws.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:12, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

'''Reuploading right now because I forgot their whiskers.. >.< -- Quiet''' !...  06:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Three tabbys in the ancients: Stone song, Furled Bracken and Jay's wing.

this is Beutiful! --Echopaw 14:27, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, Quiet! Just make the ears a bit smaller, and the chest on the longhairs kind of look wierd... -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:35, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I made an example for the shorthaired blank. If you color the nose black, it looks strange. I also used a different style for the eyes.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 17:34, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow, the lineart is really smooth. Do you have a tablet?

Anyways, the only things are that the eyes and mouth look slightly twisted, the shoulder should be brought in a bit, and there's a thick black spot. I made you a diagram to help explain.



Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:39, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I understand the shoulder, but why the jaw and eyes? Their heads are tilted slightly, and putting their jaw and eyes completely straight up would be awkward. :\ As for the thick spot, I'll see what I can do.. -- Quiet !...  01:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, I didn't relize that their heads were turned. *Fail* Nevermind. Oh, also shorten the wiskers on the right side a bit. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 01:29, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

This are so awsome Quiet! But, they look soooo cudly! A little too cudly for Sharpclaw blanks however. If you put a collar on these, they'd make PERFECT Kittypet blanks! Oh well. But for the blanks themselves, I think the eyes might be a little bit difficult to do. I mean, I don't know since I haven't colored one yet. But they look a little big. Maybe make the eyes a little more like the ones on the Cave Guard blanks?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:11, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I made an example of one. You should make the ear bigger and fix what Mosswhisker and Sleathfire said. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 17:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

No more examples; it's already been determined these blanks can be used. However, as two other users have commented, they look much more like kittypets than sharpclaws. The ones Lonewolf97 has up at the moment haven't been worked on for a while, and he can't even have them up; he hasn't had any approved yet, so he's only allowed to have one image up; Stonestar. Would you please consider changing these to kittypet blanks? -- Bramble -sama  19:05, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Please please please? All you'd have to do is add a collar--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

These would make excellent Kittypet blanks,Quietstep.I think you should tske this into though,it's easy to do the collar. '''FirePelt 00:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, been a bit busy last two days. XD; Yeah, I can make them into kittypet blanks. -- Quiet !...  18:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! *starts cabbage patch dance*--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. yours are WAYYYYYYYYYY better than mine. Wayyyy better. Mine stinks. I really like the pose! --<span style="font-family:Kartika; background:black; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">~Lonewolf~ 21:32, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the look totally says, "Pet me, I'm adorable!"--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:42, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for agreeing!They do look adorable! '''FirePelt DONT mess with me. |undefined 03:46, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

hmm..i changed the boldface for you.i love this!!-- *Ivy  spring!!*  07:43, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think if you add the collar it will be ready to go! (in my mind i would think) -Shinestar i didn't put my siggie cause i am logged on to my sis's account so ya.

Where's the collar Quiet? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 16:07, January 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * Enough. Stop pestering - Quiet will get to it when he (?) has time to. This has only been sat here for two days without work or comment from the artist. Give people a chance to have their lives too. (Also - people's names are capitalised...) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  17:33, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'ma she.. ;-; Anyway, I'm getting on it right now... And yes, I DO have a life outside of this Wiki. -- Quiet !...  02:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Husker (Lo) For Approval
Here he is again. So, Comments? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 19:42, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and darken ear pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:50, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Do you mean the shading on his back? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 20:36, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedHow's this? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 20:40, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

No all the shading. The ear pink needs to be smaller and darker,. (I know I'm a pain) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:44, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

The back is still to dark. Maplefern 21:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded is this better? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 17:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

On his description on his page,it says he has a hay colored tuft of fur on his head,there is no hay colored tuft of fur on this chararts head. '''FirePelt 22:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt, this was explained to me before, the mangas are gray, so we can't be sure that the tuft of fur on his head is hay-colored. Also some people make up fake descriptions for cats. If you want to see what Bramble said about that, check the Declined Section, for when it was temporarily declined. That said, do you see anything else wrong with the charart? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 01:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Oh sorry!I can be so mouse-brained sometimes!^.^The backshading is still a little to dark.X '''FirePelt and a Firey new year!^.^ |undefined 21:23, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

It's OK FirePelt, I'll fix the shading...-- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 00:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart -for Approval
2nd Charart first tabby. What do you think--Icecloud33 01:28, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good, but the stripes are awful thick. Thin them down a bit and make them less like straight triangles; swiggle them a little. Also, add some more shading on the legs and paws. -- Bramble -sama  18:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Is the stripe on the tail too thick -- '''Icecloud33 00:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. Just blur the ear pink and the shading transition. -- Bramble -sama  19:00, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Better? -- '''Icecloud33 20:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 05:30, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- '''Icecloud33 13:42, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The image looks lovely, but the shading needs to come from the same direction. The body has shading on one side, the tail another, and the herbs at another angle. It needs o be all at the same angle. --  Icy -chan  20:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

So where do i put the shading on the herbs and tail? -- '''Icecloud33 20:42, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

On the bottom of the tail with an angle at the same angle as the body shading, and the same on the herbs, having them both the same color to begin with, and then adding shading to it at the same angle as the body shading. --  Icy -chan  01:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) - For Approval
I've got Rock ready as well, but since there are quite some images up, with some in the 24 hour stage, I thought that it would be all right. If it isn't decline/withdraw/whatever this. I don't think I got the scars quite right. I tried to do it looking at the medicine cat version. G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 06:35, December 30, 2009 (UTC)


 * Well done with jag :) as for the scars I would try and make them go all the way to the line art (like in the warrior charart) but not the one over the eye. The ear pink is red thats right for a black cat, but on her other charart it's pink, I'm not saying you should make this one pink as well but it's something to think of and maybe make this one have pink or the other one have red. and don't forgot that we are trying to make so all the pages have a charart not just one having lots, but seeing you have made this I think it would be good to get it approved, but them try and find pages with no charart. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:53, December 30, 2009 (UTC)


 * My mistake. I intended to say that I tried to do it by looking at the medicine cat version. btw, the eye is orange. G r  a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 12:23, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, Brambleclaw, if you look at the purple message, we are now allowed to do non-current ranks. As for the image, just blur the highlights. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 15:24, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see the eye all that well. Maybe pick a lighter orange for it? The one you picked it pretty dark. -- Quiet !...  21:48, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 04:40, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

oops Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 06:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)


 * hmm...why did you say the eye is orange? :/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 17:33, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Rainstorm (W)-For Approval
(Yes this image is #36.) However, I saw my image for Rising Moon ready for approval and (yes it's me again) I put him up!!! My first mottled cat...Comments?-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  19:11, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He seems a bit dark. Maybe lighten him up a little? -- Quiet !...  21:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He, he looks a little blue to me. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:07, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

He's supposed to be blue.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  20:54, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch more.-- :) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! |undefined 21:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The spots look a bit like a pattern to me, maybe try scattering a few more of varied sizes in an uneven way? Usually on mottled cats I see the spots concentrating toward the spine, so if you just sprinkle a few more along his back, it would probably look a bit more natural. <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included  15:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose(KI)-For Approval


This is my 2nd Kit.It was gathering dust in my files,and finally we are allowed to do non-current ranks.I know im the 2nd image over the limit,but I think there 4 images ready to be approved.Critque?Comments?questions?help? '''FirePelt  22:32, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

blur shading and your NOT over page limit very good!--Echopaw 01:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.thank you echopaw!I blurred the shading more.Anything else?And Echopaw,Please sign with 4 tidles(~). '''FirePelt 16:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Nothing it's purrfect firepelt lets let sandy look at it!Echopaw 16:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment.I can't wait for bramble or sandy to look at it.I am quite proud of myself.This took a while to make.I did my best!^.^. '''FirePelt 17:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Looks like your opinion is high value, Sand. ;) The ear pink needs to be darker and more visible, Fire. Other than that, the image looks great. -- Bramble -sama  17:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

lol, no idea why =/ Anyways (see my Americanism there?), all I see, besides Bramble's mention above, is that the eyes ook very red. A paler, more yellowish amber may be better as the kits' eyes are too small to make orange visible properly. Sa nd  y!  17:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on this soon. '''FirePelt 18:08, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Thank you for the compliment Bramble!^.^ '''FirePelt  Hows the prey running? |undefined 00:36, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks good =) Comments before approval? Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  23:43, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I absolutely positively HATE to point this out, but Berrynose's warrior image is long haired. Shouldn't this one be long haired too? --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I agree and also the color isn't quite right. -- Ashshadow Rawr :3 21:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

So what your saying is,I have to REMAKE THE WHOLE THING??!! '''FirePelt DONT mess with me. |undefined 03:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

No, you don't. I can easily layer a longhaired blank over the image and fix it with minor changes to the original picture, and then all you'd have to do is run the burn tool (set on Highlights) over it a few times to make it look like the warrior version. -- Bramble -sama  04:27, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

omg.Thank you bramble!Your a big help!I'll run the burn tool over him.thank you again! '''FirePelt DONT mess with me. |undefined 16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I did the best i could to fix it.How's it look? '''FirePelt DONT mess with me. |undefined 16:21, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, that's much better. I'm sorry I scared you for a minute Fire! Okay, I'd blur the shading just a tinsy bit more. Good job!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 17:37, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lol.It's okay night.I'll fix the shading. '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 17:44, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 17:47, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Happy New Year! 18:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 23:26, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The eye color still isn't quite right. Make it more of an orangy color, like his warrior image---Berrynose --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 05:16, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm doing the best I can with the color,but it's getting harder to change it. '''FirePelt  How's the prey running? |undefined 15:08, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry Fire, I didn't mean to upset you! I'm just trying to go for consistency.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:23, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

You did'nt upset me!XD.It's just it's getting harder to change the color and blend the new color in with thie shading,cause the new color is darker than the shading.I can't change it now without re-doing it. '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:06, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no, I didn't mean the pelt color, I meant the eye color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:12, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh!I'm a mousebrain!I did'nt read the eye color I though it was pelt color! '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the eye color is much better! I'd blur the shading more though.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) for approvel
well some how would not upload blueh's one she fixed for me so heres the original --Echopaw 01:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Here you go, Echopaw. Again, please sign with four ~. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I doEchopaw 20:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

It doesnt look like you do.I can't even click on anything to go on your profile,so it doesnt seem like tidles are used.NONE of your comments are click able except for he one at the top of this message.PLEASE sign with 4 ~. '''FirePelt  Hows the prey running? |undefined 20:07, January 1, 2010 (UTC)


 * Yes well on to the charart :) The ear pink should be in the middle of the ear. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 17:25, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED i hate saying that but any more? problems --Echopaw 18:45, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and shading and this should be good. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 20:58, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED how's this? Echopaw 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * There's little gray marks floating around him. Clean those up.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:58, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blackclaw (E) - For Approval
Since there are a few images that are being approved/declined, I decided it was okay to post Blackclaw as an elder. Comments/Criticism? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 01:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

dodge the middle,cause i chan't see the shading now.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:04, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anything other comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 19:20, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the ear pink a little? More like his warrior image- Blackclaw--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:41, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 14:20, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Mothflight (W) For Approval
Second Charart! Yay! Well I decided to do Mothflight as a warrior now that were aloud to put up non current ranks again. I tried to do the shading but it would never show up! Please help! Comments? Blacky OMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 19:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Make it a pale grey (not too grey but a bit grey)so the shading will be visible. Happy New Year! 20:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Aww your off already! I agree with Maplefern. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:16, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Scratch- For Approval

 * Since so many images are at the 24 hour status and Bumblekit is almost done to be approved I decided to get this next image up. Here's Sharpclaw when he was a rogue known as Scratch.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 19:10, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Awesomeness! Maybe blur the shading. Also blur the highlights. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:17, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add a pupil in his eye. His eye looks lifeless. Give him some good life. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:18, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, Shimmy. (Mind if I call you that?) The shading needs blurred a tad, but be careful not to blur the stripes any more. The highlights really need blurred - try using the one with the hardness inside with it getting lighter as it goes out instead of the solid brush next time. I bet you didn't understand a word of that. I didn't. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 19:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated I understood what you said perfectly :D and Shimmy is fine too :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  21:36, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights still need to blurred a lot--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:46, January 1, 2010 (UTC)


 * I think this is as much as I can blur them. Updated-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  22:17, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the back is too dark; I can't see the stripes. --  Icy -chan  20:05, January 2, 2010 (UTC)


 * I never touched the shading on his back. If I lighten it then the markings wouldn't even go. That would throw the whole image off as I got the colors from his deptuy image. Are you sure its not the computer you're using? Because I see nothing wrong with the shading at all and I can see teh tabby stripes just fine.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:33, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot that he had a deputy image already, and that the stripes connected like that. Ugh, just ignore my last comment. Add a couple of small stripes to his belly and then it should be good. --  Icy -chan  04:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:46, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Stonefur (K)--For Approval


I finally have a picture and uploaded it but the picture won't appear. What do I do? WoodClan 19:21, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

1. Because it says Image instead of File.

2, xcf is not a um thing. Example png. Save it under png. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:27, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

My first Charart at last! I did this one because Stonefur appears as a kit in BP. What do you think? (Thanks for the help in uploading the image) WoodClan 20:18, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's a little to blue. Try to match the color of his warrior image.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC) I agree with Ashshadow. He needs to be blue-gray, like on his warrior image. (see here. The chest shading also looks smudged. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 20:51, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better. The title needs to say '(Character name)--For Approval'. Just so you know. Happy New Year! 22:42, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright and purplish. Make it a more reddish colour and blur. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed ear color WoodClan 21:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

It still is too bright- see Stonefur-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 21:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed ear color WoodClan 22:46, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Redwillow--For Approval
Okay, this is bad. I'll redo the image as many times as you want me to. Anyway, Comments?

you forgot your siggy maplefern and this is okay! Echopaw 13:02, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reminding me Echopaw! Happy New Year! 13:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, both the colour need to be less yellow. Make the ginger more orangey and the brown a bit more, well, less yellow as it makes it look kind of green. I was also debating whether by brown and ginger the Erins meant a kind of tortoiseshell pattern. What does everyone else think? I'm going to have a look for some real cat images and see. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  16:05, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I typed in brown and ginger cat and also tortoiseshell into google images and found a few pictures that I think represent a brown and ginger mottled cat as well as an image from google will. The first is more gingery, the others are darker. ,. Anyway, that's my take on it =) The shading also needs to be thicker and more blurred and the ear pink could do with being a tad darker Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  16:11, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Happy New Year! 16:27, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? Maplefern 20:05, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Anything? Snowfern Snow! 13:27, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar(R)- For Approval
Well, I know I'm above the image limit, but there are some images in the 24 Hour stage, and every time I try to wait, more images pop up and I can't post, so enough of my babbling. Comments?-- :) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! |undefined 16:30, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the cream patches a bit, like her leader image--Leafstar Happy New Year! 17:03, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedHm. . . I think I got it. . .-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 17:21, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The cream patchs still seem to bright.May you should save her leader image,and get the color of the patchs from That,then change the patchs on this one. '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 17:40, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay. I brought up her leader image and got colors from there. Ta-da!-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 18:09, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks a bit strange and maybe make the ear pink stretch up higher? This is just me being picky. (: -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:29, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used a diagram for the eye, so I don't know what else to do for that, but how is the ear pink? I can't make it go any higher!-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 15:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks fine. Can you try to blur the tail patch a little.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 16:05, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done. Anything else?-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 17:31, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderpelt(Ki)- For Approval
Ok there are a few images in the comments stage and I really wanted to post my cinderkit so here she is. Comments?-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 15:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

pretty good!maybe darken the shading a tad but more. '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 16:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Healer Blanks - For Approval
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There are a couple of images in the approval stage, so here are my healer blanks! I made two sets, because I wasn't sure which one looked better. The ones on the top have the regular leader tail, and the ones on the bottom have an altered one. I didn't leave the tails on the long-hairs the same. Credit goes to Melonlemon for making the leader blanks, which I modified these off of. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

SO CUTE!!! LOVE IT! Echopaw 17:38, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Can't really tell the males and females apart. . . wait, are there males and females?-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 17:47, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

These are really good!! I personally like the top ones, but the bottom ones are good too. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 17:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

There really good.I like them.They look alot like the leader blanks!The tail and some other things are diff though,there really good. '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined

You need a short haired female one and a long haired female. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 18:26, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, we agreed that we should only make male healer blanks, as Stoneteller is the only healer we've ever seen. If Stoneteller's next apprentice is a she-cat, then we can make female ones--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 18:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

actually,We have seen rock,who is a mysteriouse Healer from long ago!;D '''FirePelt  How's the prey running? |undefined 18:52, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

They are all male and we need no female blanks for now (see Blackclaw's user talk page). They look like the leader blanks, because they are, FirePelt. They have been modified, as the warrior blanks were to make med cats etc. These look good. I think I prefer the changed tails and the herbs with two pieces (if that makes sense) The only problem I see is that there are too any tiny lines on the tails that may make them hard to colour. Perhaps try and simplify the longhaired tails a little. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  18:45, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I made one of Stoneteller. He looks pretty good!-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 20:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand what you said about the tiny lines on the tails, Sandy? And the healers with the two piece herbs are the top right image and bottom left image, right? Thanks for all the nice comments, everyone! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 23:30, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Flight of Startled Heron (KM) - For Approval
Constructments? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  17:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the mud streaks some. Good job on the image though.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 17:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Do what Ash said and darken the ear pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 18:24, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The mudstreaks seem kind of gray. Make them more mud-colored. (: -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:52, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe (D)- For Approval
There are some images in the 24hour stage, so...Evanphoto 18:30, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Try and make it look a bit more like Graystripe's other images, maybe? (Lighten the body color and leave a dark strip of fur on the spine) other than that, it looks good. <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included  18:34, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I added "For Approaval" on the title, don't forget that next time.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 18:47, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Insane, you need to darken the stripe like on his warrior image. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 18:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

You dont need to upload a new image each time. Just upload over the old one, it helps save space.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 18:59, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Evanphoto 19:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is right, and the stripe still isn't quite thick enough--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:19, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reupload Evanphoto 19:25, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's a lot better. Thicken the shading more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:36, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 19:42, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make his base color and eye color a little bit lighter and it'll be perfect! WoodClan 21:45, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I've moved your image to the top of the section, it should always be uploaded up there. As for the image, blur the ear pink--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:53, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

All of the shading seems a bit dark, and the stripe wouldn't run down his tail if it's on his back. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:28, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, on his warrior image the tail does run to his tail. But your right about the shading. When I said thicken it, I meant make it bigger.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:34, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 23:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, now make the shading bigger, especially on the haunches. Look at some approved chararts for reference. Here are a few examples, but there are lots of different ways to do shading--- Berrynose Rippletail  Rainfur--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 00:32, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that looks better. But the middle of the pelt looks kinda bumpy. Try just taking the blur tool, and blur it all around the pelt. Be careful not to hit the lineart though--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:15, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Swoop of Chestnut Hawk (KM)-For Approval
Okay, there are six images in the 24 hour stage so I thought I'd go ahead and put this up. I'm not extremely proud of it though. Comments?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! The only thing I can see is that the mud streaks look more gray than brown, and they could also be thickened. --  Icy -chan  19:53, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, add a streak to the tail. --  Icy -chan  21:05, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

You forgot to sign, but yeah, it looks better. I can barely see the ear pink, though, it's always hard for ginger cats, try experimenting with darker and lighter colors until you find a good color that's easily visible. --  Icy -chan  00:47, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, and sorry I forgot to sign. *face palm* I'll get to work on the ear pink!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Alright, I lightened it, is it any better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:52, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Dewspots (W)-For Approval
My first tabby!!!!!!! Is there anything I could do to it? Comments? Thanks!!!!--Echoheart 22:03, January 3, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

Darken the tabby stripes some.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:32, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

joining
can i join the charart thing please--Firestar123 22:36, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'll add you in right away to the member list. -- Bramble -sama  22:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Grasspelt - For Approval


I got an image of a green cat first time I read the name. Constructments? -- Bramble -sama  23:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Bramble! I like it! Maybe blur the shading under the ear (the one closest to us, with the ear pink) because it looks a little dark. Good job! (: -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:25, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

That's what I thought too! I think it's fine.... Snowfern Snow! 00:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wing (KM) - For Approval


-shrugs- I could be prouder. The mudstreaks didn't really turn out how I wanted them to. Anyway, here's Wing Shadow over Water as a kit-mother! Sandy said I could use the queen blanks. Comments? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:24, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Try doing the mud streaks thicker. Snowfern Snow!00:02, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thickened mud streaks. Nice siggie Maple. ;) -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:58, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Join
I'd like to join,please!--QuailflightTheCat 23:27, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble or Sandy will add you to the list. Welcome to PCA! I'm Batwing. If you have any questions, please tell me on my talk page, or check out my tutorials for help on charart. (: -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:30, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Nice to meet you, Batwing. It's really nice to meet you. Happy to be in PCA with you!--QuailflightTheCat 23:34, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Same to you, Quail. (Mind if I call you that? :P) -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:50, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Petalfur (Ki) - For Approval
This is my first two-colored kit, as well as only my third kit, and I have to admit that I'm actually proud of this image. Comments and suggestions? --  Icy -chan  23:42, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Icethroat! I see nothing. Snowfern Snow! 00:10, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Tadpole (Ki)- For Approval
So this is my first cat up for approval. Any suggestions?--QuailflightTheCat 00:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Good job for your first charart! But the lineart seems kind of blurred... try doing it again with this blank: The shading looks great though! -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:54, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. That's probably my horrible shading. 8)--Quail 01:01, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

No, the shading's great! Tell me if you need any help with it. I'm fairly good at black cats. And you've took on a hard one for your first charart! Black and white cats are the hardest to shade - trust me, I know! Snowfur was my first cat! -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I know too. Before it switched to Kestrelflight, that section was Hollyleaf-who I'm thinking of reposting. Snowfern Snow!

Thanks, Batwing. I'm going to re-upload it, and make sure it looks better. I didn't use any highlighting, oh yeah, something's wrong with my siggy! :( 8|--Quail! Meow! 01:53, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, I re did it. Hopefully this is a little better.--Quail! Meow! 03:00, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, I think Blackclaw had this reserved first, but I'm not positive. I'll check the history--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:22, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually Quail, I don't even see your siggie on the current project list. Did you even reserve Tadpole?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I did. At the bottom. Sorry for any problem, Snowfall. --Quail! Meow! 03:31, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Well it looks as if Blackclaw reserved Tadpole under the status as a rogue, however Tadpole was seen as a rogue kitten. You may have reserved him later on under the right blank I believe, but Blackclaw did reserve Tadpole first even if it wasn't under the right status. I'm not a senior warrior anymore so I think we might have to ask Sandy or Bramble about this...or maybe Blackclaw will let you keep the image up.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:55, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Ki)- For Approval


He was cuter and nicer as a kit.-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 03:27, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oooh, it's nice! But blur the shading some more, and blur the gray on his legs--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:28, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed the gray on his legs. Is it better that way or the other way?-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 03:44, January 4, 2010 (UTC)