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Featherwhisker (Ki) ~ CBA
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Dull and blur the highlights, please.-- 00:45, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:51, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing. 19:21, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

They're showing for me. I don't know what the problem is, if it's on your end or what... 17:27, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the light on <-- visible leg.

Re-uploaded 14:37, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded fixing shading 14:40, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Is it my screen, or is there a square on her chest? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

I'm trying to fix that. 15:46, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. gosh 15:53, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. WAAASTEEE also featherwhisker is a dood 15:56, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs? You're doing great! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:56, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i just want this to be approved tbh 16:20, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't worry you're getting there. Blur all the shading a bunch, and lighten it a shade or two on the right side > 20:10, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. mmm delicious shading 03:57, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading, that's all I can say about this lovely image right now ^^ you did a brilliant job. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:20, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Also, is the shading layer above the eyes? Because the eyes seem to have shading too. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:21, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, it is. Do you want me to fix that? 23:15, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:19, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading; it’s also leaking away from the lineart. Also, can you put the lineart above the rest? It’s supposed to be pure black. Other than that, this is so adorable! --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Im sorry, but i think this will most likely be declined soon due to the one month limit =(.-- 06:00, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Although you're right, please keep in mind, Breezeheart, that saying that is not your place. A project lead are the only users allowed to say that- just like asking if you're still working, CBA'ing, ect. Sorry, Gia, I don't have a choice.

Uploaded. Finding my own unique shading style..I think I finally found it. Well gonna use my dads laptop to do images while on vacation. Comments? 15:56, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can barely see it. it looks so much better than mine ; - ; 16:39, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

IDK why... But why do I think the base color seems very light compared to his other images? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:09, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

The base should be around the range of #BFBFBF. I somehow have one of his files (don't ask, I have a shitton of files lmao), and that's what the base shows for what I have. Also, smooth out the shading- it's rough in some places.

I color picked from the starclanner so the base should be accurate. And the shading is supposed to look like how it is^^ but I'll smudge it a tad more just because it does look a bit odd in some spaces. But I'm trying to find my own style so yeah.. I'll try to re-upload sometime later on. 18:08, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

You haven't uploaded since the 30th- are you still working?

Yes I am. So sorry, I caught the flu that same day I said I'd reupload and I just got better. I'll reupload within the hour or so. 13:27, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Had to redo the whole thing because my dads laptop is not available so had to redo it on my moms..eh don't mind too much though. 14:19, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source, at least on the face. 23:03, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think it's alright, many other users have shaded their kits' faces like that before and where it is brightest on his face is where the light is coming from while the rest is shaded. So I'd rather not touch it. If anyone else thinks it is unclear where the light is coming from though, by all means say something and I'll tweak it. 03:22, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

I actually agree with Gia- the entire face looks to be in shading and I can't tell where the source is at all. Getting real sick of this "I think it's alright thing" with PCA do I need to bring up another wall on the talk page because I'm gonna do it.

Re-uploaded. No need honestly, I was only asking for another opinion. And I have seen other images like it, so I just thought it was fine. No need to worry.. 14:13, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Do you mind smudging/blurring the earpink just a tad bit more? It looks a bit hard edged. If you think its fine, feel free to disregard this.

I agree with Breeze, please smudge/blue your earpink some more ^^ 23:13, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 06:23, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

I wish I was, but I'm getting really busy down here and I'm gonna have to withdraw. I won't be able to do another image until I get back on the 23rd. 13:43, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing Tallpoppy, so may I take over? 15:14, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reups changes not yet showing 15:07, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink is very hard edged. 15:46 Sun Jan 18

Reups 19:18, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 19:02, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, it looks really purple and dark. 22:27 Tue Jan 20

No, I think it's fine. 22:50, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Jake (Ro) - CBA
not sure why he's getting both a loner and a rogue cite, but I guess it must've been in the PC discussion. rainbow collar should totally be canon. 16:09, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! The pelt color is fine, but where did you get the rainbow collar cite? I thought it was purple. Also, maybe fix the pupil shading? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 16:59, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Nope to both. The collar color is artist's choice as we don't have any cite for it, so I'm making it rainbow. Jayce made it purple on the kittypet, and it's pink on the kit, and blue on the loner above. Eye style is also artist's choice. And even if it wasn't, 'fix' isn't specific enough for me to know what you want me to do. However, reup forgot the nick in his ear. 17:50, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah his twolegs could've gotten new collars for him over time too^^ you can match if you want, but it's not mandatory. Could you define the earpink just a bit? This is lovely Shinx^^ 17:56, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups 18:47, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit too thick, maybe lighten it up a litlle? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 22:06, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

(Since you said you put the nick in his ear in I'm assuming you did) Could you define the nick in his ear? I can't see it like, at all. 22:54, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups 23:26, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

NOOOOOOO I wanted this XD Honestly, the stripes are too smudged together, looking at his kittypet, you can see the stripes clearly and tell that they are smudged into the direction of fur. I honestly can't see any stripes at all so mind defining them? ^^ also, ifs he a dappled tabby? Because on his kittypet image he only has stripes. Lovely image! Betters than what I could do :D ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:26, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Stripes aren't smudged at all?? I did the same thing as I did with his kit image, it should match entirely. He's also got no dapples?? Just stripes?? 00:29, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Eh what I'm trying to say here... The stripes are a little bit too misplaced, they are scattered all around in circular forms. If you look at his kittypet his stripes are clearly lined along his back in an orderly line (eh I can't explain), and it does look like dapples but blame me because my eyes are so bad O.O ignore meh if you think it's fiine but I'm just expressing my opinion. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:32, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Also, could you smudge the shading more on the legs? It looks black and hard edged. sorry if that sounded rude! ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:47, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Ohhhhhhh... I get ya. 'reups Not making the striped perfectly straight though. IRL cats don't have such neat stripes, usually. 01:07, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smoothen out the outline of the back line of the shoulder? Looks too dark..Oh and have a happy   on January 6th! 1:51 January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Okie... I'm sorry. I still can't see the stripes. They need defining and right now they look like texture. And there really shouldn't be other stripes on him rather than the ones on his back and a few stripes on his haunch and legs. The stripes don't really have to be totally straight but right now my opinion is that this still doesn't match his Kittpet version. Sorry if I sound like I'm nagging your image. ~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:00, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

reups Lol you're not nagging, I appreciate the comments and you commenting on people's images actively is a good thing. But I have the file for both the KP and the kit, and this should match both now. And I'm not darkening/defining the stripes, I have the file for both images and it's on the same layer mode with the same opacity and the same color exactly. 02:53, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

You're gonna kill me for this Smudge the shading more on the legs, it looks hard edged. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:27, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. 14:17, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Burnt here; the leg shading does look a bit hard edged to me. Im really getting tired of all the "its fine" shit; Its happening way too often on alot of images, and its getting really annoying. =/ 11:23, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Breeze, please watch your language. Honestly, that was extremely uncalled for, and was quite rude. Dark can have whatever opinion she wants. If you wanna argue about it, take it to the discussion page. However, I do agree with the shading being a bit hard edged around the shoulder blades. <span style="">14:29 Sat Jan 10

It wasnt aimed just at Dark; it was aimed at alot of the members in PCA. Its really getting out of hand; and quite frankly, annoying. It shouldnt have to come to a debate every other critique, tbh. I wasnt intending to be rude, so im sorry you took it that way. I was simply trying to get my point across. 00:19, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

While you're at it, smudge the tail stripes more. They look very hard edged. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:57, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

finally reupped 14:49, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the tail still looks hard edged. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:42, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Same as his loner tbh. Can you lighten up the shading a few ticks? I looked on both mu laptop and phone and it looks really dark in spots. I think doing that might dull the hard-edged look that the tail has.

reups 13:51, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the leg is still quite hard edged. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:25, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

I disagree. I think it looks fine, honestly. 04:58, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

And I agree with Fox Girl. I've been told to smooth out hard shading like that countless times. It doesn't need too much, I think.

reups 14:39, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Whispering Breeze (Ki) ~ For Approval
Wow it feels like a while......my first charart on a laptop, comments? <span style="">08:38 Fri Jan 9

Add a few more stripes, thicken them a tad, and lighten up the shading on <== side, I can't see the pattern through it. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:39, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ---> foreleg and lighten the overall shading a bit 11:26, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge and lighten the stripes. They look too dark to me. 17:24, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the stripes, maybe? They look really hard to me. 19:20, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Gosh I completely forgot Reups I've been so busy sorry <span style="">15:49 Thu Jan 15

The forhead stripes still look hard. Good job on her. She's beautiful!^^ 20:49, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and thin them out. They look really fat, unless they're that way on the other images. 22:55, January 15, 2015 (UTC) The shading on this < side is still a bit too dark? Maybe lighten it? 02:29, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I hate tabbies <span style="">09:22 Sat Jan 17

It's still very dark. Lighten it up? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:04, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

If I lighten it anymore I'm going to be asked to define it. It's fine. <span style="">18:57 Sat Jan 17

Define the neck/lower face shading a little bit. Doesn't need too much. <span style="">21:06 Sat Jan 17

Define the light on her tail. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:44, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes in her forehead match a bit more. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:07, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

define all the shading that isnt on our left side tbh. 11:28, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

You still workin'? 19:00, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading to the left. <span style="">20:28 Tue Jan 20

Lighten the shading on the left side of the body, like Gia said, and lighten the shading on that right front paw. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:44, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Tallstar (Ro) ~ CBA
He gets one, according to the PC discussion. Comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:40, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot- it's really dark.

This should be neamed File:Tallstar.rogue.png Rouge is a type of makeup. xD <span style="">18:31 Fri Jan 9

Re-named. I also think it has to do with the color red??? idk.

Yeah, rouge is red in french. Also, can you define your light source? I can't really see where the light is coming from too well. <span style="">19:09 Fri Jan 9

Can you try to make this match his other images more? Also, extend the tail, if you didn't already; he was named after his very long tail, so it would be in the charart. 21:01, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Redid it, as it wasn't cooperating LOL, I know you guys all want this image. I'd better watch out XD ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:53, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

The white doesn't really match his other images. Smudge the white with a smaller brush. Also, the white on the chest is still rather dark. <span style="">14:36 Sat Jan 10

Just to say, the white on the chest is dark because there's texture. Define the texture a bit more plz. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:36, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Shrink the white on his haunch, like I said before. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:52, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Comments would be appreciated. Comment away so I can improve this quickly. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:14, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Why are the white tufts of fur on his shoulder and hind leg so big? Its just a small piece of tuft on his deputy, loner and kittypet picture. Also another thing, why isn't th tufts of fur on his StarClan picture? Tweak maybe? (Sorry to make you feel offended D:) 21:03, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Because the StarClan image is facing a different side. I think the white spot on his shoulder needs to move <== way. The spot on his haunch can be left alone thou. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:18, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

While you're at it, sharpen the texture on his chest. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:21, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Comment away ppl :p! Better to point out the mistakes now than later. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:30, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the texture on the chest it's making the chest look like a smudge of grey. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:34, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up Fixed other issues as well. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:20, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head, and only the white on the tail.

Re-upped I just want this to get approved tbh. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:12, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Four days without comments. Anymore? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:47, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Minor thing, but is there any chest shading? It looks a bit flat in that area and I can't tell if it's from the overabundance of light or flat shading?

I doubt there's chest shading, but I'll go ahead and define the neck shading. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:02, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:06, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

he needs to be darkened a little or have the texture thinned or thickened depending on how you did it, he looks a little light right now compared to the other images. 11:28, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Whoops, the texture was dark gray X.X ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:55, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 21:41, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Minty (BS) (K) - CBA
Saw this was still available, figured I'd snag it. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:58, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define texture? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:39, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Damnit, I still wanted this There isn't any texture, Burnt, as far as I know. It's just shading. 13:54, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

There is texture on her kittypet version. I can't see it here though, mind if you can define it? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:06, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

You know, on Bramblestar's Storm page 166 it was stated that she had "black patches on her ears and belly", so would you mind adding some black to her stomach? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:21, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't texture on her kittypet; at least, not a layer of texture. It's just that her patches are smudged, which is done here. I tried smudging them a little more; does that help? And I did give her black patches on her belly; it's just that her belly is mostly hidden by her legs. There's one there by her right front leg. If you're counting her chest as part of her belly, there's one on the left side of her chest as well. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:03, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also, shading has been defined. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:03, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the entire shading a tad? It's very dark. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:27, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:01, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

It's still quite dark. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:27, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:49, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry to make you do this, but could you define the tail shading a bit? oh I love the way you shaded this..I gotta try your style soon. =) 04:55, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'm very sorry, but I still think it's quite dark. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:39, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

And also I think it is alright^^ shading darkness is artists choice and I can tell its white so I think it's alright. 13:32, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lightening it a little wouldn't hurt anyone tbh. Perhaps just a tick or two on the opacity bar?

Reuploaded and lightened. I don't want to lighten it too much, if that's alright, otherwise it won't match her kittypet as well. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:35, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Brackenfur (Alt W) - CBA
Whee ~ Texture! (He was called pale brown in Bramblestar's Storm and he got a brown tabby alt so.... I believe this warrents?) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:06, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

I think he'd still be considered a tabby.. It's just shortening his description. Pale brown counts, yes, as it's not golden brown, but he'd more than likely still get his tabby stripes.. all his other alts have stripes.

Re-upped Oi I love tabbies <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:32, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

He kinda looks a bit orange... Perhaps shift it on the color wheel to a bit more of a brown? Beechfur's brown is about #A58360, and Grasspelt's is #A06F44, if you'd like to use those colors. Clovertail also has a good shade of pale brown you can use as a reference as well. ^^

Re-ups IDK he just looks orange when I lighten brown :/ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:45, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I like how he looks now. You didn't mess him up or anything, honestly. Now just define the ear pink a tad. =P

Re-ups Darkened the tabby a tad too. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:52, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped OMG stupid me I forgot about his grey muzzle <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 09:02, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, please. It looks great ^^ 12:32, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

I see it just fine. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:14, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

The head shading could be defined, along with the front paw that is least visible.

Can you define the gray on the muzzle? I'm having a hard time seeing it. Well done! ^^ 02:25, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs farthest from us. This is wonderful, great job! 04:52, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Bomb those comments at me, ppl! :p <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:02, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the scar a bit? Lovely job. 16:44, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. This is great. <span style="">21:08 Sat Jan 17

Re-ups OMG stupid scar and ear pink took me ages. Defined shading too. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 04:55, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the grayness on the muzzle. This is amazing, Burnt. :) <span style="">14:58 Sun Jan 18

Re-upped Thanks! :) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:12, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Dustpelt (Ki) - CBA
All colors from the StarClanner. <span style="">15:05 Sun Jan 18

Maybe define the pale color on the nose? This is way better than mine Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 17:10, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading. <span style="">18:33 Sun Jan 18

I colorpicked from the StarClanner so the nose would be this dark. As for the shading, I'll get right on that. <span style="">20:57 Sun Jan 18

Re-uploaded. Firetail, you will get better with practice. With more experience comes great art. Just spam your computer's images with practice images. It took me like 300 practices to get myself where I am now. If I can, you can too. :) <span style="">21:03 Sun Jan 18

Define the pale muzzle and expand the ear pink a tad. Lol my mom's mad that her computer is trashed up with hundreds of pictures of cats XD <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:21, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink takes up the whole ear. And if I define the pale muzzle (which means remove shading) I'll be told to define the shading on the head. <span style="">1:30 Tue Jan 20

Okay, never mind then. XD <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 01:40, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Cloudy (ki) ~ CBA
took 'em long enough. 19:01, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. <span style="">19:41 Sun Jan 18

Wha? I think it's fine - I can see it clearly. 19:43, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ooo she's gorgeous Beebs XD define shading on this==> leg please. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:04, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 03:18, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smoothen the chest shading? So KAWII!^^ 13:25, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Im not seeing any chest shading, bramble? Could you smudge/blur the earpink just a tad more? 01:00, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tick or two, please.

re-up 19:51, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Unbelievably cute - CBA? 21:42, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Icicle (Ki) ~ For Approval
oh look more kits <span style="">19:42 Sun Jan 18

Re-uploaded oh look waste <span style="">19:43 Sun Jan 18

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit? 19:45, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:32 Sun Jan 18

The shading is leaking from <== this side. Blur and define the shading. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:51, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:07 Mon Jan 19

The shading is still leaking at the same place. Perhaps make a new layer, shade over the leaking part and remove the waste? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:43, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Where is it leaking? <span style="">03:18 Tue Jan 20 03:18, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

<== this side. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit, if you don't mind.

Are you sure those eyes aren't just one plain colour? Also, brighten up the face more please? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

The face brightness looks fine to me. 21:43, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Erase a little of the shading on both front paws, they shouldn't be entirely in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:46, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean "are you sure those eyes aren't just one plain color?" Do you want me to define the pupil shading? Also re-ups <span style="">22:17 Tue Jan 20

re-ups freakin' tails, man <span style="">22:21 Tue Jan 20

re-ups WAAASTEEEE also i fixed the eyes for you, at least i think i did. also dulled the highlights because they were wayway too bright <span style="">22:26 Tue Jan 20

It's still leaking a bit. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:21, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Star) - For Approval
Eh..her pattern is hard :p 20:18, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? This is beautiful. <span style="">22:31 Sun Jan 18

Thin out the stripes. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:22, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on her cheek looks flat. brighten or smoothen it maybe? Correct me if I am wrong. 13:30, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I think the stripes are good in terms of thickness. Maybe blur them on a very very very very light setting to make them a bit less hard-edged?

Also, lighten the shading a smidge? Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:47, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Have a Honeykit! Base Colour from SnowedLightning, everything else from apprentice. --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:22, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Frogtail (Ki) - For Evaluation
Firetail is back... with Frogkit this time! I used PAINT.NET and colorpicked from his apprentice image, comments? (P.S. this is technically my first charart again since Dustkit got declined) Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 00:18, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's texture... ? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:22, January 21, 2015 (UTC)