Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Nominations/Approved 8

Larksong ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Larksong.elder.png That shading...it's flat, and doesn't sit right with me. I'd like to tweak it. She's also a tortie, but the colors are too close together. I kinda want to make it stand out a little more.
 * 19:38, November 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * ouo 20:24, November 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * 12:21, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Badgerpaw - Redo Nomination
File:Badgerpaw.apprentice.png File:Badgerpaw.kit.png Kay this has been bugging me for a while, and it's just kind of a preference tweaked, but I wanna redo the shading on them, and just make the markings less.... messy. And plus the markings on the kit don't match. I'll keep the same pattern of course. This would technically be a tweak since I have the files, but basically the only thing that will be left is the colors, so... :P I do want this if it passes of course. 21:57, November 6, 2012 (UTC)


 * You are right, they don't entirely match. I know you can do better.
 * I guess 09:33, November 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * 01:33, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (A) - Tweak Nomination
File:Bumblestripe.apprentice.png His stripes don't match the warrior's very well. 21:21, November 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:46, November 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * There is only so much you can do with a blank that's in a totally different position and the stripes have to bend with the body. I'm not going to vote because that'd be biased, but I don't think it needs it. 17:07, November 4, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think that these should just be smudged a bit more, and even though it might be difficult, (since it is a small blank) the kit, too. 02:20, November 5, 2012 (UTC)
 * Just add a few more thin stripes to match warrior 04:55, November 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Just add a few more thin stripes to match warrior 04:55, November 10, 2012 (UTC)

Rippleclaw (W) - Redo Nomination
File:Rippleclaw.warrior.png Another, like above, that has those shiny spots that I think it's better off redoing to get out. 23:20, November 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Might I take this one?
 * aye 04:54, November 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 11:28, November 10, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (PH) - Tweak Nomination
File:Stormfur.ph.png He's a shade or two lighter than the rest of his images. 23:13, November 9, 2012 (UTC)


 * sure. Can I have him? I still have the file
 * 11:28, November 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15:48, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers ~ Redo Nomination
File:Dark Whiskers.sc.png Meh, you'll probably disagree but I feel as though the shading is blotchy, and the highlights/whatever they are are also blotchy and don't make much sense. I'd like him if it passes. 00:31, November 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, the shading looks a bit funny. 21:06, November 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah... might be a good idea. x3
 * 15:50, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (W) - Tweak Nomination
File:Boulder.warrior.png The stripes could be a bit darker to match the other images. x3 02:10, November 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13:43, November 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 15:49, November 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22:46, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds (SC) - Redo Nomination
File:Chasing Clouds.sc.png Okay, so, I don't think this would be possible to tweak and improve without the original original file so I'm nominating a redo. All of the white looks grey on him and he's got some odd shiny spots. I would like to do this and I think his pattern can be kept. 23:00, November 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * Mmhmm. Totally agreeing with you on this one.
 * 11:28, November 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:23, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sunspots (Q) ~ Tweak Redo Nomination
File:Sunspots.queen.png The shading needs work; she appears to be pale grey, not white. 15:11 Sat Nov 10
 * I think it could be redone, since trying to fix that would be a hassle. The shading is dark and it doesn't look like the base is white anyways, and unless Splook (or whoever did it, I'm not sure) has the original file, it would be better off as redone, although if it is, I think the style should be kept as is.
 * I thought about nominating this the other day. I agree with Cloudy and think it should be redone. 21:03, November 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nah, the file was on my other computer. But since it was my image, I'd be more than happy to redo it with the same style myself, if that's alright. 21:18, November 10, 2012 (UTC)
 * Moved to redo. 00:54, November 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 13:42, November 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * ^ 21:21, November 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * ^ 21:21, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Jagged Lightning (SC) - Redo Nomination
File:Jagged Lightning.sc.png He looks gray and white, when he should be black and white. There doesn't seem to be a visible light source that's noticeable, and it seems there's this odd shine to the image. The white also looks extremely overblurred. To be honest, I think it would be better off redone, as trying to tweak this might or might not make things a little more difficult. If this somehow passes, I would love to do his image, as Jagged Lightning is my favorite Ancient.


 * Eh. As I said, I'd prefer it to be tweaked, but that just seems more trouble than it is and it could be better off as being redone. 19:39, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Ew shiny spots. 21:33, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:20, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Russetfur (A) - Redo Nomination
File:Russetfur.apprentice.png - Technically this would be a tweak nomination be enough of it would be changed, might as well call it a redo. I want to redo the stripes; they look waaaaayyyy too thick compared to the rest of her images and I also want to fix up the shading. To anyone who doesn't get my rant, Russety is mine! *mahahahaha*   22:46, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * I suppose.
 * 02:13, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:20, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Snowtuft ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Snowtuft.warrior.png (et al) A few very minor things; Rogue image has blue eyes, but the warrior has green, left ear needs to be torn on rogue, the scars and earpink don't quite match up, and the earpink is kinda hard to see on the warrior. 19:21, November 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * If the rouge is tweaked, it's mine. I do want to say, however, that the scars don't have to necessarily match, and I think they're fine as it is. As for the eye color, I can easily change that.
 * And I'd like the warrior, it'd be much easier for me to do a smiple tweak 19:55, November 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * I believe that the scars are fine, but everything else we should do. And in my opinion, I think that the shading should be defined a bit on the warrior, but that may just be me. 15:46, November 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 02:11, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:23, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Half Moon (SP) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Stoneteller (Ancient).tb.png that file could use renaming to File:Stoneteller (Ancient).sp.png imo The shading makes her appear to be pale grey. 05:12 Tue Nov 13
 * The shading itself is fine, but /does/ need to be lightened. Perhaps ask Scarlet to take a couple seconds and lower the opacity on the shading layer? It isn't something major, so...

I have to agree with Cloudy here. ouo 05:16, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Uh...aren't these like, blanks being redone anyways? (for the softpaws at least) 06:24, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * yeah, the blanks are being redone, but if we want to go ahead and do it, I'll do it. It'll be easy to fix. 22:47, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay. 21:24, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Onestar.apprentice.png I think the shading could be defined and maybe darkened in places. 00:01, November 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think he looks fine. 00:08, November 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * yup 23:57, November 14, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think it could be given a minor tweak...nothing too major, but, yes. It should be defined a tad.
 * Just a tad... 21:24, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Foxheart (A) - Tweak Nomination
File:Foxheart.apprentice.png I'm sorry, and I know it was just approved, but the colors and stripe pattern don't match her other images. owo 19:05, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think it could be fixed with a bit of blurring and darkening the shading to match 21:38, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yep. 21:08, November 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * Mmhmm. 21:25, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sagewhisker (MC) - Tweak Nomination
File:Sagewhisker.mc.png The whiskers need to be longer, I'd like this please. x3 01:41, November 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * I still have the file. Can I do it? I totally forgot about that when I redid the image.
 * Of course, Cloudy. x3 01:47, November 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:07, November 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:25, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarstar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Cedarstar.leader.png I guess he needs a greying muzzle, since his muzzle is already grey, it must be a lighter grey or somethign for the cats to notice it. -confuses self- 23:53, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think lighter grey would work. 23:56, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Since Loonie's got the file, I assume she wants it... would it be too much of a hassle to also darken the base /just/ a tad? Also, lighter gray would work... I think.
 * Well, when humans' hair turns gray, it's usually lighter than their hair color, and almost always the same shade of gray, so lighter it is. 17:04, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart (E) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Shellheart.elder.png It says he has greying whiskers, so...tweak or no? 02:55, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * It would be a quick tweak, and if it says he has those he should get them :) 16:58, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Hmm... it would seem like a tweak...
 * 04:21, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

Brambleberry ~ Redo Nomination
File:Brambleberry.mc.png File:Brambleberry.mca.png. Now, I know the MCA is up for a tweak nomination, and that's what brought this to my attention. Now, don't get me wrong, both images are wonderful, but each has their flaws. Both images look gray, and the patterns don't really match (the MC has smaller, lighter flecks, and the MCA has darker, more roundish ones). Her description also says "small black flecks", and those really aren't that small. If this (somehow) passes, I'd like both images.
 * Mmhmm. I've been wanting to nominate this for a while. The flecks on the MC are also overblurred, and on both images, those aren't really flecks, they're dots and spots. Not the same thing. They need to be smaller and less round and uniform. More random-like. 16:51, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * I agree. It'd be too difficult to just tweak, and if it was there wouldn't be much left of the original image anyway. Plus, like I was telling Starry when she asked me about flecks, they almost look like natural rain drops (not how drops of water are usually drawn) and are not supposed to be round. 17:06, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * It's more than just the pattern they both look very grey. 04:19, November 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorreltail (A) - Tweak Nomination
File:Sorreltail.apprentice.png - Darken the shading 01:25, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * May I have this, she's one of my favorite characters. x3 01:33, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Of course, Duck. 01:42, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17:07, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 00:25, 21, 11, 2012

Briarlight (A) - Tweak Nomination
File:Briarlight.apprentice.png - Darken the shading 01:25, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, might be a good idea. I'll take her.
 * Also needs blurring. 01:44, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * 00:25, 21, 11, 2012

Sunfish (Q) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Sunfish.queen.png I feel as if the shading could be defined in places and perhaps darkened a tad. I'd like this if it passes. 00:22, November 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * Not too much darker, though. 04:44, November 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * Could also use some blurring/smoothing out, too.
 * 00:25, 21, 11, 2012

Talon ~ Redo Nomination
File:Talon.cg.png, et al. - None of the images really match each other. The CG's stripes are vastly different from the elder's and the rogue looks just like a different cat. I'd like these please if they pass. 04:00, November 20, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think the elder is perfectly acceptable. Perhaps the others should be redone to match it?
 * Redoing all but the elder sounds good. 00:25, 21, 11, 2012
 * For matching the elder. 17:48, November 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * As per Breezey.
 * Agreeing with above.  18:09, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye ~ Tweak Nomination
File:One-eye.apprentice.png File:One-eye.warrior.png File:One-eye.queen.png File:One-eye.queen.alt.png File:One-eye.elder.png So, yeah. I honestly think that her lost eye should be moved to the other side, so it's visible on her main image, since she was indeed named for it. I brought it up in the chat, and a few others agree with me, so this is why I'm nominating it. I'd like the normal queen, as I have the file, and I'd like to keep it consistent.


 * 17:50, November 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * 18:11, November 21, 2012 (UTC)
 * On a side note, could I have the elder? 00:20, November 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Could I possibly have the warrior and alt queen? =3 01:22, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot ~ Redo Nomination
File:Webfoot.elder.png etc. The pattern looks a little off... the stripes are kinda thick and there are random spots that make him look sort of mottled. I'd like to do the elder and the apprentice if this passes. 08:34, 23, 11, 2012


 * Yes. 08:36, November 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Could I have the warrior? 08:37 Fri Nov 23
 * 02:24, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart(A and Ki) - Redo Nomination
File:Skyheart.kit.pngFile:Skyheart.apprentice.png They need to match the warrior and be light brown, I'd like these, if nobody minds. x3 15:56, November 22, 2012 (UTC)


 * 07:04, November 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 08:12 Fri Nov 23
 * 08:34, 23, 11, 2012

Nightstar (E + L) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Nightstar.elder.png File:Nightstar.leader.png could be tweaked to look 'battered'. 07:00 Fri Nov 23
 * Some patchy fur and scars would probably do it. 07:01, November 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * Unless Paleh wants it, can I do the leader? 07:05, November 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 08:35, 23, 11, 2012
 * Elder's mine. =P

Broken Shadow (Q) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Broken Shadow.queen.png Define the shading; I can't even see it. 14:53, November 26, 2012 (UTC)


 * 15:18, November 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * I'll take it. I still have the file 22:25, November 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22:48, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Stick ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Stick.warrior.png File:Stick.rogue.png He was mentioned with ragged fur. Not sure bout that loner. though. o3o Also change warrior's colour to match better 13:45, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * He was mentioned as a loner before the ragged fur mention... although with that, it's hard to tell. Can I also nominate a color tweak? The warrior doesn't match the rouge and loner very well in terms of color.
 * yup I'll add that to the thingy 13:55, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure how, but it also mentions that his pelt is scraped, I was thinking maybe with a big patch of fur missing on his shoulder or back? 19:18, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * I agree with Ivy. That sounds like a good idea.
 * Not sure if I can say this, but can I have the rogue or loner? Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 22:38, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * 22:49, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Macgyver (KP) ~ Redo Nomiantion
File:Macgyver.kittypet.png The white looks grey, the shading is sorta odd and the markings look overblurred. I'd like it if it passes. 03:10, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Mmhmmm.
 * Go fer it 19:21, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yus 22:50, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt.Q2) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Daisy.queen.alt2.png I dunno...the white seems like pure white and the shading and highlights seem very blotchy. I'd like it if it passes. 12:42, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * There's no white on this one? If you're talking about the normal white alt, that's mine, and if there's an issue, I'd like to fix that. (there's nothing wrong with using pure white)
 * Sorry, wrong one x.x 13:20, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Oooh, that one. Yeah, I agree.
 * Ew shiny stuff 22:50, November 27, 2012 (UTC)