Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 19

Dapplenose-Approved
I'm a little unsure of the spots... -- Darkhallows My den 08:10, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful Shady! I see nothing wrong, as usual. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:01, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

This looks just fitting for what we call my cat, (perfection in a puss). Nice!Minnowclaw 23:17, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  21:14, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. -- Bramble -san  21:35, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Quickpaw (A) - Approved
Since Echomist made that beautiful charart of Morningcloud, I figured that her apprentice should have a charart as well. Plus, I wanted to try a ginger cat charart, as I've never done one before. Well, how does it look? Ice throat  21  21:31, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Cute! Blend the shading a little more though, it really sticks out to me.  HA WK FI RE98  21:40, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's it look now? Ice throat  21  23:02, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading the littlest bit.Minnowclaw 23:18, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ice throat  21  02:37, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Verry, this is great! Nice job Ice.Minnowclaw 22:55, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  21:08, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. -- Bramble -san  21:35, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (Ki) - Approved
Now that my first image has been approved, I've put up another one. It's Stormfur as a kit this time! How does he look?--Hawktalon 20:22, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Awwww, he's so cute! I think you should thin the shading on the tail, our left and the neck. Otherwise, this is great!Minnowclaw 23:26, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I thinned his neck, tail, and left body shading. Minnowclaw, did you mean the left side of his body, or the whole left side of the image?--Hawktalon 19:21, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

The nose needs to be pink, and the shading seems...lopsided. G B 57 15:52, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the nose to pink. Im sorry, GB, but what do you mean by 'lopsided'? --Hawktalon 16:09, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

I mean it looks like you moved all of the shading to one side in each area (legs, tail, torso, etc.). G B 57 19:10, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

How do I fix the shading? --Hawktalon 22:41, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not sure what GB means, but if you could blur all your shading, and maybe smooth out the right angle on the left side of the neck/throat shading, it'd be great. -- Bramble -san  23:14, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred my shading and fixed the neck/throat shading. Constructments? --Hawktalon 19:48, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

He looks fine to me. Are there any further comments? -- Bramble -san  21:53, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. -- Bramble -san  21:35, October 8, 2009 (UTC)