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Ravenwing (MC) ~ CBA
I'll probably redo the earpink later 00:10, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! There's waste near the herbs. Also mind lightening him up just a little bit so that the shading can be a bit more visible? 00:29, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

He's black, not dark gray. Please do not lighten him anymore. He'll just be tweaked later to be darker. I actually think darkening the shading and perhaps playing with your shading and highlight layers might solve the problem.

Define the ear pink? 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I just read the book poor him. Make the eyes a tad darker please. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes are actually fine. 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

lel he deserved it, anyway add some shading or something to the herbs so they dont look flat. 14:46, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I pretty much redid most of this because I lost the layered file. 1:11 25 Mar. 2015 (UTC)

This should say "For Evaulation" since you are a kit, but no need to change it. I'll promote you since you know what you are doing. 02:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more, please. 06:17, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''  19:37, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you please lighten him up very slightly, I can't see any of the lineart. 06:55, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope this isn't too gray now. 19:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

lighten him a tiny bit more, still can't see any lineart 21:31, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. I'm not lightening it anymore after this. 23:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. 00:14, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit as well. 13:53, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:50, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? I'd can't see anything wrong with this tbh. 03:32, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstar (L) - CBA
So happy I finally got my first leader image. :D I'm really happy with how he turned out - I tried to make him look like a burmese cat, but I think the darker face kind of got lost in the shading. Ah well. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:16, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink :3 So much like an oak tree, so beautiful(like I said in the chat) 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Wow! Looks Great! It's fur looks so much like oak!

I see the earpink fine, tbh 02:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very well done! Can you define the legs shading? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading too, please. ^^

Along with define it, could you blur the tail shading a little bit? I can see it, but it looks hard-edged. 15:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the muzzle shading a bit? It almost looks like he has a rope tied around it xD like a muzzle. Lovely image, I love the way you did the texture. =) 06:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his base color just a tad if he's dark brown. Smudge the tail shade just a bit more. 04:57, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

tail shading is fine tbh 21:32, 03/26/2015

Darkened the coat color (didn't realize Oakstar was dark brown) and smudged the muzzle shading a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:27, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 03:35, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Bloomheart (W) ~ For Approval
Well, I tried. This is my first in a while, sorry for the cruddiness. For the eyes, I didn't know what color they were so I went based off a really cool chart which I will link. They're hazel, like a greenish for Blooms? Flowers? Pink ears also based off what the same chart said was normal. 00:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. :) Add shading to the right side of the front leg. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Also, would you mind lightening the shading a tad? Correct me if I'm wrong 01:09, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Done so. Looks a bit better, did the MLP style of shading the back legs-  01:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the ear pink a bit bigger.

It would suck if you guys made me edit it so much and then regect it, but it's good practice  01:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye color 05:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. Remember, defining doesn't always mean darkening but it means making it less blurred. 07:53, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look too blurred, can you make them less blurred? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Pixlr crap and won't sharpen, if needed I will redraw those stripes //shot  11:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Redrew stripes, will fix them soon-  14:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the frontmost back leg. Please stop aligning your images.

Sorry, it looks really weird. I have to align it, it's the option? Now it's going > way, and really weird. Someone fix that please? Maybe a mod? Wow, this image is getting a lot of edits... Knowing my luck, within a week bam it'll be moved to declined. 18:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just remove the |thumb on the end. Anyway, the stripes are very blotchy, do you think you could thin them out and sharpen them a bit? And perhaps add more after that, since they're be thinner?

Reupload Redrew stripes. Right now I'm just waiting for it to be declined. 23:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay first, please stop saying that your image will be declined. You don't know this, and it could very well be approved like every other image on the approval page. It really seems like your trying to guilt trip us, honestly. Saying things like that will /not/ get your image approved faster. This image is very well done, so i see no reason why it shouldnt be approved at some point. As for the image, define the tail and foreleg shading please. 23:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Sorry, I didn't mean too... well, maybe I did, I'm a bit confused right now and I'll stop. Also, fixed the shading. I don't mean to guilt trip you guys, I'm...Not really good at control that stuff? I'll stop, promise. Fixed shading as well. 00:05, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink a bit more and smudge it a tad more. And like Breeze said, it is a wonderful image. I see nothing that'll make you think this will get declined. =) 06:13, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Just bumping OuO  12:25, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 20:41, 03/25/2015

Sorry, Fern... I can't really do that with pixlr. OnO; -- 23:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The whole thing looks overblurred. Also tone down the ear-pink a bit and erase the waste around the head 02:35, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Tried to use the sharpen tool, I will redraw the stripes or upload the backup w/o pixel effect??? Let me know if it needs to come to the whole redraw thing 11:36, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

i'd suggest redoing the stripes and blurring them less then. 21:35, 03/26/2015

Splashfoot (W) ~ For Approval
My first charart, comments? Also, could someone tell me why this is coming out really small so I can fix it? 21:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Well firstly what program are you using, Icebreeze? 22:32, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

GIMP. 23:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, so maybe you're not making it full size. To do it, click on the blank on the charart page and click full size. Also, are you using layers? If not, make a layer and put the colors and add another layer for shading. Okay, so can you define the shading, please? 23:25, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for all the help, Tiger! Your suggestion about making it full size was very helpful, and I think I have a correctly sized blank now. Yes, I'm using layers, and I have defined my shading on my charart. I will re-upload tomorrow. Thanks again! =) 01:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The image needs to be bigger. It isn't the right size as the others. 03:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Anyways, why is the eye sort of... deformed? 08:35, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

It'll probably be fixed when they use the right size blank as they mentioned earlier. 11:37 Wed Mar 25

Re-upped Okay, at least the charart is the right size now 20:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The linear art was weird in some spots, tell me if you notice any more. 20:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the lineart is still blurred. File:Warriorlongm.gif <-- Save that file, clear the white parts, remove your current lineart layer, then paste this in as a new layer. If you don't understand what I'm saying, I can show you. Alternatively, you could just redo this completely with the file i linked you. 20:45, 03/25/2015

Add a little bit of light on the front leg. It looks like something out-of-sight is blovking it. Spottehwobble!

Re-upped I completely redid the image. I will add some more light on my next reupload, I didn't see your comment until it was too late, Spotteh 23:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading a little less blotchy, define the ear pink, and maybe use this as a reference for shading? 00:07, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the earpink on the back ear and there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. 01:23, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the edges of the shading on the hanch. 13:31, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ok, I redid the shading 21:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out some, and there's some waste around the image. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

remove the shading from the tip of the tail, and the shading is leaking at the bottom of the tail. put shading all up the backside of the tail 21:38, 03/26/2015

Re-upped 21:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the back,legs and end of the tail. Good job! 😃 -- 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the back, back legs, and on the part under the base of his tail 22:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Sun! =) 00:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and define the eye depth. Given the shading a good blur with a hard edged blur tool. 04:59, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 20:35, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Extend the tail shading and blur it, as well as the front leg shading. 22:16, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:33, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit, please. Also, clear up the waste near the front paw please. I think I'll make you an apprentice after this. 00:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:50, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking on the back spine and there is waste in the triangle area between the legs. 00:56, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

You seem to know what you are doing, so I'll go ahead and make you an apprentice. Also, can you expand the light on the haunch? 00:58, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks for making me an apprentice, Tiger! =D 02:02, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and light in the front legs? 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 13:37, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and blur the tail shading some. This is gorgeous! 03:31, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Deerdapple (W) ~ For Approval
Sweet 22:12, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Can you lighten the base color a bit, please? 22:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more 01:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define head shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 01:52, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Define the shape of the ear pink. I can kinda see it, but at the same time, I can't.

define the shading everywhere a tad 11:36 Wed Mar 25

Reups thanks, Tiger~ 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's silver, lighten up the base color just a little more. 00:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 02:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and I think this would be ready (not like it's my choice but this looks awesome =) 11:06, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Thrushtalon (W) ~ For Approval
I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-; 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me. 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups The shading looks wwwwaaaaayyyyyyyy better, /not  19:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the shading some 20:46, 03/25/2015

re-up 21:10, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the stripes on the haunch on under his neck/chest; he's starting to toe the line of triangle tabby. Also, blur and lighten the shading on the back 21:11, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could lower the shading's opacity as well, because I can't see the stripes at all through it. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up re-did him and made him a mackerel tabby. Dont know if it was the right choice... 02:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and blur it more. You can try secondary shading as well but it's just a suggestion. 02:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I should darken the shading more '-' 02:41, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit? I <3 his stripes. 02:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also, can you smudge/blur the stripes a bit, too? 03:03, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Spiketail (D) ~ For Evaluation
Welp... first charart. Hopefully I don't chicken out or get arrogant and I didn't screw anything up /)-(\  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:45, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the pupils/eye color? I can't see any at all, and he needs to have them. Also, darken his base just a bit, and blur the main body shading a tad.

blur the shading a lot, and make the light on the bent leg more visible 11:35 Wed Mar 25

There is waste under at the outside of his chest. Pretty goood for your first one! 19:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed eye colour, redid with a darker grey. Eye colour was originally supposed to be grey until my lesson learned: Never put grey eyes on a grey cat. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Realized I messed up on shading. I'll start work on it tomorrow when I wake up or after I get home from the hospital. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:41, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Add pupils, if you want to look at examples, you can look at some of mine. 04:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added pupils (who ever knew eyes could be so difficult? I need new glasses). Might as well do this before I sleep since it's fast. Thank you for the examples, Foxy :) -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

You're welcome! If you need help you can always ask me. :) Now, just darken and define the shading and define the eye depth. We're getting there and he looks awesome. 10:49, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Is it okay if I can get a recommendation on what to set the blur rate to? I use Gaussian Blur on gimp. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:29, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, it depends on the blanks. I used to make 25 my very maximum for any blank, before I started smudging instead. Try stuff out, see how it looks. Gaussian blur tends to make look flat or occasionally blotchy, though. Try using the blur tool on a high rate if you have trouble finding a good setting for guassian blur. 18:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere Russettail13 (talk) 02:09, March 28, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Could I get some assistance on trying to shade in GIMP? I know, it sounds stupid but somehow, GIMP just doesn't want me to shade correctly anymore. I tried using the smudge tool (though I suck at smudging), I tried using the blur tool, and I even tried using gaussian blur. For gaussian blur, the option was greyed out. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Try a hard edged blur tool and blur the edges only at a rate of 100, make sure the mode is RGB. It you would like I could make a tutorial for you. I suggest not using the smudge tool until you have more practice. However if you do decide to use it use a hard edged smudge tool at the rate of 60 depending on how much you want it smudged and smudge the shading towards the direction of fur. Sigh with ~ please. 03:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dang it! I forgot, thank you for reminding me. That's what I get for being sleepy. I'll try, but if it doesn't succeed, I'll redo the image. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Eeltail (MV) (Warrior) - For Approval
Lil' Tabby 17:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a tad? Russettail13 (talk) 18:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Add a touch more light to the fronts of the forelegs and top of the tail 21:12, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:51, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it looks a little grayish and it's hard to see. 21:17, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 13:42, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think this is the tom blank, and it needs to be the she-cat blank. 15:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

But doesn't it confirmed that he is the same Eeltail who appeared in Code of the clans? 16:37, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

As far as I can tell, it was decided that Vicky was only talking about the cats who were from Firestar's Quest, not any of the other books. I asked Kate on her blog, but it hasn't been posted yet. For now, at least, it should probably be a she-cat blank. 18:48, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay 18:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the shading on the back legs. 03:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval
My first medicine cat, and I love his name. ^.^ Comments? 19:09, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the texture more? Beautiful! And can you define the shading everywhere? Im having a hard time seeing it. 19:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks =) but if ya don't mind I'm gonna ask for a second opinion on the texture, just because I really like the way it turned out, but if someone else agrees I'll smudge it a bit more. I did define the shading, however. 20:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

just lower the opacity a bit more, the way you smudged it is fine 20:47, 03/25/2015

Sorry, but you're going to need to match this image, as we have confirmation that the cats listed in the allegiances of Firestar's Quest are the same cats in Mapleshade's Vengeance. This means removing the texture- I apologize.

Re-uploaded. Ah I see. And you're fine, who would've known other than the author herself? But I must say I'm a tad confused. Does that mean instead of^^ this Sloefur being male does he have to be a female? And also have long fur to match the other one? And have the same file name as the original since they're exactly the same cat? 22:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, everything needs to match- from the gender down to the pelt length. Sorry, that's just how we work- If Vicky says they're the same, then we don't have a choice. Gender can easily be changed later with the lineart, so that's no big deal. It just needs to match.

Re-uploaded. k he's now a she, and long-furred. 22:15, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit, please.

Define the earpink just a little? 10:48, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Myler (KP) ~ CBA
???? 0:55 Thu Mar 26

Define the tail shading just a bit and I am going to steal that collar and run with it goodbye.

Re-uploaded. Pff... fine. ;D 1:29 Thu Mar 26

Smudge the shading more on the legs. 04:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Anywhere in particular? 20:46 Thu Mar 26

His front leg mainly, just a bit. This is gorgeous. 00:09, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. :) <span style="">20:57 Fri Mar 27

Let's CBA this even if the collar has been stolen bc it's sexy 03:27, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (K) ~ For Approval
Hiya. 04:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make him more brown? 04:56, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading- I can barely tell it's there.

Define the earpink too, please. 22:18, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:12, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Is his base brown or black? Because tbh it looks black/dark gray.

'''Re-uploaded. '''It was a very dark brown on the orange side of the color wheel. 16:58, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W)~ For Approval
Sorry for not posting sooner I just got a new lap top and had to redo some stuffs. Anywho, here's Midgey. 11:49, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

he needs patches in his fur. 11:50, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the eyes...? All I see is the default area- did you forget to give him pupils and such?

Reups Oh my xD how could I miss the eyes if all things? 12:30, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There are still no pupils, also define the tail shading 13:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I reupped the wrong one lel. I added the defined shading though (this time I chose the right one xD) 14:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

where's yer light source? the haunch says one way, the chest says the other <span style="">21:40, 03/26/2015

Define the light on the legs, please, as well as the shading on the head. 22:46, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 17:27, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the neck shading a tad? 00:21, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (W) ~ For Approval
My first warrior. For the chest, I tried to go for a soft look (feather soft!) 02:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the feather softness was in reference to the fur's feel and not necessarily the color. Thicken the shading on the back and define it on the head, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. 02:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I know, I thought just the lighter chest is fitting, and tried to make it look soft. 02:55, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Unless he's said to have a lighter-colored chest, I think it should be removed. It's allowed on tabbies because they usually have them.

Blur the shadin more 10:46, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Make the base color a little less gingery? Russettail13 (talk) 16:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Reupload 23:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

He looks really orange, make him brown just a little more. 04:29, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Now he looks kinda green... <span style="">22:45 Sat Mar 28

Reupload goodness hope his not feeling sick XD. 23:00, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tone down the ear pink a little and define the light on the legs. 11:04, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Rainfall (W) ~ CBA
Black cats are hard to deal with. 09:17, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit.

re ups that's why I thought it looked so weird 0.0 09:23, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit more. 20:17, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

In my own opinion I think if I lighten it more it'll be invisible. 02:12, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, the shading's fine, just define the ear pink a little and I think this will be ready. 04:20, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  10:29, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 10:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Petalkit (MV) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Made her belly a little fluffy. :3

Smudge the ear pink just a little more? 11:18, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Alt. W) - For Approval
- Basically the same as her warrior, just blurred the eye colors together and made the pupil dark brown instead of black. I haven't gotten a chance to read MV, so idk if she has scars by her eyes or not. 21:35, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

maybe make it almost white so its more noticable? I think her eyes would have ended up something like those blind cats that have silvery/milky white eyes, but maybe milky yellow or something. idk im bad at explaining 01:57, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'm just asking but if she was injured by the snake then shouldn't she have a red mark on her face? Otherwise it looks like there's no difference. 04:23, March 28, 2015 (UTC)


 * Normally, I would add scars, but there's nothing in her description that suggests that she acquired scars. then again... I haven't read MV yet..   05:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She was injured by the adder, which caused her blindness (and she died from it, I think), so... I believe adding some form of scars would be acceptable to differentiate between the normal image and after she was injured.

Re-uploaded 14:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the pink around her eyes more and maybe just make the eyes a tad more white perhaps. 17:44, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on her front right leg and the light on her right back leg 03:25, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reedshine (MV) (Q) ~ For Approval
01:31, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define all leg shading? 02:20, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you also define the tail shading a tad? 02:59, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

^^^ Aswell as the facial shading, please. I can barely see it. 03:44, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded ugh forgot how nnoying dark orange cats are 04:15, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck maybe? or my eyes might be failing me...I'm in the sun. 16:29, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Milkfur (MV) (W) ~ For Apporval
Lets approve this quick before I eat her base color is pure white so please do not tell me to change it 06:16, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Wrong file name whoops can someone rename it please 06:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'll get that. You're gonna need to change something, because she looks a bit brownish-cream, and if she's supposed to be white, that's what she's supposed to be.

Re-uped Lowered the opacity of the texture that was causing the problem. Without the shading she is actually really white now. 06:27, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

she still looks cream. 06:33, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped This shading came from hell I think 06:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She looks so good and tasty but I think she does look cream. Maybe tint her a little closer to blue? Idk 06:46, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I would really not rather tint her blue bc the style, without the shading she is pure white. I tried lightening up the shading a little bit if that helps. 06:52, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

something needs to be done, because shes still looking cream. 03:42, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's the shading or the texture thats making her cream... 03:52, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

What I meant by tinting to blue is the texture and/or shading. 05:15, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ew 10:38, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry to say, but she looks kinda... green? for some reason :\ maybe you should try black... I think I'm just directing you to make a mess but I'm trying to help... white cats are tough too :PPP 11:11, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

How does she look green????? And I tried black, it doesn't fit well with the shading style I'm probably gonna redo this dumb shading if I can't get it to look right. Sorry for constantly opposing you, but I don't think it looks green at all. 11:18, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't look green the slightest imo 11:20, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Birchface (Ki) - For Approval
Welcome to the jungle, we got fun and games. All colors are from the warrior.

Define the shading on the legs 10:47, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Perchpaw (MV) (A) ~ For Approval
Oh dear, he looks too much like Clear Sky X.X 12:27, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh I like Clear Sky quite a lot :o maybe define the head shading and shading on the back? 12:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:33, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the ear over there <--- and connect the shading on the tail to the shading on back leg? 16:25, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is connected from the back leg to the tail, as far as I can see =/ and I think the ear is fine, it's lighter because it's not shaded. Anyway, great job, this is beautiful! 16:52, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Seedpelt (MV) (Alt W) ~ For Approval
idk <span style="">17:15 Sat Mar 28

Weren't she and the other Seedpelt said to be the same cat? And if so, shouldn't she match the other Seedpelt's description? 17:34, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

it would be an alt now, it should just be renamed and it'll be fine. 17:42, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-named. Also, brighten up the white a bit on the muzzle and tail.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I remember that alts had to match the normal images in terms of fur length, so, shouldn't this be short-furred, like the other image. 23:13, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/Smudge the white more and define the earpink. 23:55, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't Seedpelt match her new description? 03:54, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

this is an alt, not the warrior. 03:55, March 29, 2015 (UTC)