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Whiteclaw (Star) - For Approval
My first StarClan charart. Comments? Brick 20:18, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Edity-boop. Showing a version by another member, the pic I made is here http://i59.tinypic.com/25070yc.png Brick  20:19, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, fixed some issue I had with lighting on the face. Link is http://i60.tinypic.com/350kto4.png Brick  06:48, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Whiten the paw some - it's looking gray. 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, hope this is better! http://i62.tinypic.com/110xaiu.png Brick  21:06, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink some - it looks a bit too bright. Also, try using pure white for that paw - maybe it'll make it look whiter. 00:10, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I accidently uploaded an old file instead of the newer version, fixed version issss here --> http://i57.tinypic.com/w1xt9j.png Brick  13:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, especially on the white paw. 17:02 Sun Jun 8

Re-ups, linky is http://i62.tinypic.com/16kysk.png. is it just me or does he look a bit like a plastic toy with his expression and overall look? Brick  16:55, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, especially on the white paw.

Try darkening his base coat, too - he doesn't seem black. 14:12, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I tried my best ;-; http://i59.tinypic.com/fymop.png  Brick   12:59, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Since he's a primarily black cat, his nose needs to be black. 19:02, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading/highlights.

Still working?

Cinderfur (Star) - For Evaluation


Hey so I saw that Cinderfur was on the list for characters needing art, and I'm all like WOO I LOVE THIS GUY. So, here you go. shading i'm so sorry    20:42, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 20:44, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Erm... this isn't the file I uploaded. Wikia, what the heck?!?! 20:45, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the thumbnail of the one you uploaded on the recent photos bar. Define the eye depth and chest shading. Brick 20:50, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups (hopefully Dang it Wikia!)  uggg shading me no likey 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

If it still isn't showing for you (as it seems to be doing for me), I'd reccomend uploading it to an image sharing site like tinypic or Photobucket. Brick 16:45, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Do not use photobucket. That stores the images in albums and things like that. Tinypic is good, and I also think ezimba is a good one.

Still working? 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

I'd like to be, but I've got finals. I'll try to have the chnges uploaded in the next 2-4 days. I get out of school early on Wednesday and Thursday, so I'll have time then, if that's okay? 21:38, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

/ Reups! 18:08, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart.

/ Reups 00:27, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading and blur it some more. 0:41 Sat Jun 14

Re-Ups. If changes aren't /showing 17:16, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading in the area between the shoulder and the haunch. 14:12, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-UP. Changes here 21:06, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shading still leaks away from the lineart.

How do I fix that? Also, how do I prevent it from happening? I keep being told to smooth out the shading, but... then that happens. Also, can you point out where it is? I can see it along his belly... 00:52, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Add some more depth to the shading. It seems quite flat. 17:34 Wed Jun 18

Re up. Changes here if need be. 15:36, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out, especially the defined bits. Brick  14:35, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 1 that's about as much as I can smooth it without it leaking again. 15:20, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 21:30, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

I will if someone can tell me how to fix the shading leak problem. 23:08, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Poppyfrost(Q) - For Approval
changes this was fun c: 21:27, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Why does it look like she has stripes on her? o.o She needs to be dappled and if you have them, I'm having a rough time seeing them. Also blur the transitions between colors, and blur the shading on the white a lot. At the same time, define the shading on the non-white.

Re-uploaded whoops I though those were stripes when I was going off of the kit lol 22:07, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Changes 00:10, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples just a littttleee bit more? 15:08, 06/7/2014

Re-uploaded 15:53, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add depth- lighten it a bit on her legs and stuff. It'll be lighter in some areas than others. 20:29, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:56, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white.

smudge around the patches a little bit more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:56, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not going to smudge the patches more because the other images don't have it and It was just a small thing I added but i did blur the shading more. c: 02:27, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the patches where they transition to the other colors. Mind you, I'm looking at the warrior when I say this, not the other images.

Re-uploaded 04:42, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light and shading on all four legs. 19:03, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:24, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 18:55, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I just noticed this now, but can you whiten the white on the muzzle and chest? They seem rather gray. 01:05, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

You can clearly see that it's white because of the other white and besides that it's gonna look a tad gray because of my lightsource. I think it's fine. 03:40, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

If anything, I think the white in general could be brightened in some places... but anyways, can you please blur the leg shading?

Re-uploaded The white is white you can tell in the areas where the shading isn't, but the shading is more on the white than the other patches so I think it's fine. 03:49, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (Kit) - For Approval
First charart since joining again. Comments? 21:19 Fri Jun 6

I'm sorry but since you reserved after posting this, it may have to be declined... I may be wrong, though, so don't shoot me if I am. 21:30, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

-Shrug- Oh well. My chararts aren't good anyway ;~; 21:31 Fri Jun 6

Nah, it was only a couple minutes, as seen here, and sometimes it takes that long to post an edit somewhere. I think Cloud should be allowed to keep the image. I'd have no complaints. Some people forget the dates at first too and we let them slide.

Okie, just had to check~ ask Berry for the file of one of the other images, I believe Berry did those ones, so that you can get the colours precise; it looks a little lighter than the warrior, but it could just be my kindle. Define your shading and texture too. Don't you say that your chararts aren't good, Whisker; honestly, this is great, for your first in a long time! 21:49, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

I asked her, now I have to wait xD thanks sorrel   22:01 Fri Jun 6

Re-up. Shading is a bit better, I think. Also defined texture. 22:24 Fri Jun 6

Define the texture a bit more? 21:37, 06/7/2014

Re-up. Also defined texture on patches. 23:01 Sat Jun 7

Sharpen and thin out the shading a lot. 20:26, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I oculdn't really sharpen it, but re-upload anyway~ 23:32 Sun Jun 8

Define the shading; it appears a bit flat.

Re-up 22:06 Thu Jun 12

Try darkening and defining the brown patches. Look at the warrior and rogue for reference. Try smudging them with a size one brush - but not too much, though! 14:13, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the gray a touch and define, not darken, the shading. 18:13, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up 22:13 Sun Jun 15

Runningnose (D) - For Approval
i'll just leave this here 00:30, 06/7/2014

He needs a gray muzzle. 00:34, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

reup 02:29, 06/7/2014

Add light to the far hind foot bc that wouldn't totally be in shadow unless he's super awkward at sitting. Thicken the rump shading a little more, and add a bit more towards the center of his haunch because cats are skinny and the bones would protrude a little more on an older cat. 20:24, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">23:39, 06/13/2014

The color on the muzzle is leaking towards part of the herb bundle. <span style="">00:30 Sat Jun 14

I thought it was doing that as well, but it's not. The herb layer is above everything else, so it can't be leaked into. Also, I found some waste, I will reupload momentarily. <span style="">00:36, 06/14/2014

Reuploaded. I also played around with the thickness of the shading on the haunch. If it's too thin, I'll thicken it again, but it looks better to me now ^;;; <span style="">13:20, 06/14/2014

CBA? 18:31, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

So sorry, but can you define the shading on the face and on the tail and his back left leg? 21:06, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

Blackclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
-That was annoying to make. But whatever! I probably missed something. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:50, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Make his nose black. If you look at black cats in real life, almost all of them have black noses. Also, add a little more depth to the eyes. Great charart :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:46, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, in this case, the nose has to match the color of the other images nose colors, which I'm fairly certain it does. 02:55, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

His nose is black on his kit and apprentice.

Yeah okay, so sorry 'bout that. Guess I'm more color blind than thought. 03:00, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks for the compliment, Breeze. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:54, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Here's the colors just in case you couldn't get them right because of my shading. The smokey things are at about 25% opacity, and I used a flecked brush to smudge/place them on the charart. If you want one of the files for direct colors, opacity levels, ect, go ahead and say so and I can fire them your way. =) I shade weirdly lmao

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thank you! <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 22:07, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 16:08, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:45, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge/and or blur (whichever you want to use) the light patches around his eyes a tiny bit. this looks amazing~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:15, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:17, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on his forelegs. 18:55, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 18:43, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I found some waste. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:17, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''More waste. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:16, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Star) ~ For Approval
Yay. :3 Comments?

Define/darken the shading, and could you smudge it so that it flows with the fur? Those are some really amazing eyes. <span style="">16:39 Thu Jun 12

Smudging the shading isn't mandatory. =/ Idk what everyone's thing is with smudging but not everyone does it

No, that's not it. I can clearly see that the shading is smudged, so I'm only suggesting that it be smudged in the way of the fur. ;) <span style="">18:07 Thu Jun 12

Add the texture. It's a bit faint, but it is there. 19:12, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay then. It doesn't look smudged to me but whatever. o.O

Re-up ~ I thought nobody would see I smudged the shading a little bit, but oh well. XD I'm not really good at smudging shading so I added a very thin layer of highlight and smudged that, but it's hard to see on a black cat. And Bbun, what do you mean with texture? Sorry, I'm from the Netherlands so my English may not be really good. ^_^"

As in, the dark black "stripes" on his rogue. Those are texture. Please add it ^^;;. 18:16, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Hope I got what you meant. :3

Darken and define the texture. I can barely see it. 14:10, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ I tried, but I don't know if it's better now. :/

Darken the opacity on the texture - it should be slightly darker than the base coat. 18:56, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Tried again. I also added a little bit more highlight. I don't know if I do it good 'cause I never worked with texture on cats before.

Mossheart (Star) ~ For Approval
Withdrew from Hawkheart's StarClan image to do this one. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:13, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Shapen the patches some. 20:46, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:57, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the black a bit. 23:37, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, since i colorpicked from her Medicine cat image, but if someone else agrees i will.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:29, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

I gotta agree with Duck on that note^

Re-up.  Thats as dark as i can make it without it not matching her other image. =/~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:06, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 18:56, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:26, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

can you sharpen the brown a little, its a bit sharper on her mc image 10:43, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Boulder (Ki) - For Approval
23:36, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:21, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:37, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded darkened the stripes and played with the shading, I think it matches better now (and besides that I like it better now) 21:07, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the neck shading.

Re-uploaded 21:19, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Moss (Q) ~ CBA
Comments? 03:27, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe add a highlight on her face? it looks like its all in shadow. Try adding one on her cheek (The one towards her tail and backlegs), since the lightsource looks like its coming from there.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:07, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine. It's not all in shadow - the shading's just dark, that's all. There is one, it's just a bit faint, dear, but it's there =P 22:09, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the belly shading. I know it's there, but I'm having some issues seeing it.

re-up  18:26, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

I can't tell if you did anything or not... comparing the changed files, it just looks like you reuploaded the same thing again. o.O

here for changes  00:21, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and I think this'll be pretty good to go.

re-up 19:19, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Comments before approval?

Icewing (Q) - For Approval
hi

Define the shading. dat name x.x 18:11, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like her name 8D

Define the shading on the face some and this will be good. 18:57, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Pebbleheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
The stripes on his face make him look funny. x3 Comments? 17:09, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the white mark on his chest.

Reups changes are here 18:30, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Whiten his mark some more - it looks gray. Try putting a highlight on that spot, and put it on the mode screen, so it looks brighter. 18:57, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes I can't lighten it anymore now. The white is pure white, and there is no shading on the mark at all. 13:30, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

If it's pure white, and there's no shading on the mark, then why does it still look really dark? o.O

It's not /really/ dark, is it? And it is pure white, I've checked thrice. 21:57, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe it could be my computer screen, or me being picky. That's fine if you've checked, dear. I won't force you to change something that you've already said is pure white.

Graystripe (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Comments? He'll stay gray, fyi, since we have a specified color. 18:24, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

There's no reason to make him anything other than gray, since he has a specified pelt color. ._.

Define the light on his tail. (Also, why does he have those light gray flecks? I thought he was only metioned as a tabby... :/)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:35, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think the flecks are part of the tabby pattern...

Can you define the stripoes however, I'm having a bit of a hard time picking them out. 03:43, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

re-up the pale flecks are indeed part of the pattern (the pattern is rosette, which has the pale markings). I think the light on the tail is fine, unless someone disagrees (I did darken the shading in the process, though). Just darkened the stripes some, that should do the trick. 18:18, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Ehhh, defining the light on the tail would be a good idea, I think. It seems really dark compared to the rest of the image.

re-up 21:56, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Dew (Ki) ~ CBA
Demons, I tell you. They. Are. Demons. All colors from the rogue. <span style="">20:24 Mon Jun 16

They make such cute images, though. Define the head shading.

Re-uploaded. <span style="">1:52 Wed Jun 18

CBA? 20:24, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
tfw u almost like your charart 00:04, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the head and tail shading a bit. Maybe this'll finally get approved after two other people trying to do it

re-uploaded i hate tail shading on these blanks 00:09, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Is the neck shading throughout the entire neck area, or just on -> side? I kinda can't tell and you know the source for this image better than I do.

Cloudberry (Q) ~ For Approval
I've always loved her name. Comments? 18:32, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and define it on the head and chest.

Define the shading on her front legs.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:33, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 13:26, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading.

Cloud (Storm) (KM)~ For Approval
hm i dont think ive done mud on a cat before 10:37, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, would you mind removing just a bit of the mud? 13:24, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think the amount of mud is fine. This is incredible! <span style="">17:09 Thu Jun 19

yeah i think its ok, i mean theyre rolling around in it so its bound to go everywhere thanks man 23:33, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit?

Voletooth (Star) - For Approval
Not totally happy with this yet, but I can edit it more later. Suggestions? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:09, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reuploaded. Shading has been darkened and defined, and I also added a bit of highlight. I'm much happier with this now, though I'm not entirely certain about the stripes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:02, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Tansy (Lo) - For Approval
Wasn't feeling like a texture today lmao

Could you define the shading on the legs? This time I will take them mwahaha <span style="">21:03 Fri Jun 20

Thunder (Alt. R) - For Approval
- The shading looked a lot better on my laptop…. >.< 01:41, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

If he was described as golden, wouldn't he get stripes? Since I believe just golden by itself is a variation of ginger.... 01:43, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:32, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, and add some depth to it. 03:38, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Frostfur (Q) - For Approval
- All colors came from her star clan 01:41, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Silverflame (Q) - For Approval
Not sure I got the texture totally right. The changes are here, if they're not showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140621C/ezimba19266771982600.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:32, June 21, 2014 (UTC)