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Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. 21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink 01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray 16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Theres waste by the butt 13:45, 5/09/2017

Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--  22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one

Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall 23:50, 5/09/2017

Reups --  20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images.

Reups --  02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place 02:43, 5/11/2017

Is there chest shading? If not, add some. 02:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define flank shading? Nice. :3 03:22, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  04:02, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The placement of the gray doesn't match completely. Especially check the warrior image, as you can see the difference between the shades better there, and also how there's a more defined patch of gray on the face.

Define the shading more 01:29, 5/12/2017

Reups --  02:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Ok I think the gray should match the elder's image since it was lightened/tweaked before the others and if that's the case then this is too dark, also the gray looks softer than the other images, and it's still kinda hard to tell what's gray and what's shading on the chest and front legs

Well, I was just asked to match the warrior image so I'm not sure what to do when critiques contradict each other :/ --  16:05, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The critiques, at least the recent one where I said to match the warrior image, don't contradict. I was talking about the gray placement, such as on the muzzle (which from what I can see, still hasn't been done). Snow is talking about the coloring, which is a separate issue, and also the coloring in other spots not previously mentioned.

There's a stray white pixel on the <--- paw. 21:08, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more 21:31, 5/15/2017

The shading on --> side of the head looks a little dark, maybe lighten and smooth it a little? 13:15, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like defining isn't the right word for this, but expanding is. I've noticed that the artist repeatedly "defined" the shading on the same spots when they should've expand it instead. That's why the shading looks pretty dark and not visible in some areas. It should be expanded on the tail and stomach.

Reups --  21:04, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 21:06, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's a few pixels of grey in the area behind the <- front leg. I think you could smooth that out a little or get rid of it. I can put a red circle on it if you'd like. Branchwing (talk) 01:05, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs, chest, and belly area and lighten the shading everywhere else 04:16, 5/18/2017

I think it looks too dark compared to the other images, but forgive me if it's just my screen or something.

Reups --  20:34, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

There's some hard-edged shading on the arm, see here http://vvcap.com/5NI5dU5r7SI 21:07, 5/19/2017

Reups --  14:44, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

The shading still appears to be leaking by the <--- arm. 15:48, 5/20/2017

Reups --  00:09, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten tail shading on the patch of shading the --> side near above the chest. Also, the --> left paw looks as though it has dapples on it, is it supposed to be like that? Sorry if the last part was rude. :P 02:35, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

No one ever corrected me so I think I'm right that the gray should match the elder image, which is significantly lighter than this

On the ---> ear, near the tip, it looks like there's a lighter spot on it, try to fix that so it matches the rest of the earpink. 13:33, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

elder was tweaked for pale grey first, so yeah match that one 15:28, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:46, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The grey on the tail looks dark compared to the rest of the images. It might be just the shading, but it still looks dark. So, could you possibly lighten the color there or just lighten the shading in that area? Branchwing (talk) 00:21, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back, and perhaps smudge/or add some closer to the lineart? I looks like there's hardly any there and maybe smooth the shading, just a little on <--- shoulder. 13:33, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more 18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please 01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs 21:32, 5/15/2017

Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">00:56, 5/17/2017

Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

What means tad? – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

tad means a little bit.

Do I have to do something with legs? – 07:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

All you have to do is smooth the shading more over the whole image, and define the speckles a little bit in the shading <span style="">13:55, 5/18/2017

Reupload – 08:56, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin out the shading on her stomach a little? After that I think it'll be good to go. If I wasn't very specific, you can just say that. Basically what I meant is like the shading up from the haunch. 20:20, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken the speckles even more? Also if you're American you might be forgiven for not knowing tad, it's chiefly british --

I am russian ::::\ – 13:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

I noticed no one ever answered your question about shading depth and I still think it could be defined so here's an image of one of the apprentice tutorials, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:BCPrincess73.tutorial.png, which mentions shading depth so I hope that helps you

Reupload Would you like some vanilla ice cream with chocolate chips? – 10:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

It looks white, and less creamy white <span style="">19:39, 5/22/2017

Smooth out the body shading

Reupload – 08:21, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The shading could be smoothed more. 13:30, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

i dunno XXXX| – 15:45, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible or define it a bit more? It's hard to see it on my screen. Unless others see it just fine on their screens. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:37, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

I do think it wouldn't hurt to smooth just the neck shading. 20:17, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Are you really sure? – 06:55, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

well people dont generally just say things for the sake of it so yeah they're sure lol. anyway to fix the problem just ligten it by like 10% or smth then gaussian blur if ur lazy and patch up the leaking areas. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:13, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload What means "patch up the leaking areas" – 15:49, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the earpink a little not more? I'm still having trouble visualizing it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 18:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the neck shading again and also smooth out the tail-tip shading? And also, to answer, patching up leaking areas is referring to the shading-away-from-the-lineart leakage that sometimes happen when gaussian blurring, so yeah.^^

Moonflower (Alt. W) ~ CBA
All colors came from Bluestar's queen image, which I still have the files for. Comments? 22:53, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on both the back paws? 22:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a little on the neck/upper back area? 22:58, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:04, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Think shading's leaking on both front paws.

It's also leaking away from lineart on the back > of --> paw, near the rump area

Define the shading a little bit. Branchwing (talk) 00:36, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth also. <span style="">04:39, 5/17/2017

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  10:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry for the wait; I was on vacation in Florida, had very little time to work on this, and just got back home yesterday. Uploads should be more frequent now. 20:36, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

There's what appears to be highlights leaking on the belly. http://i.imgur.com/5nZCt6f.png Branchwing (talk) 21:26, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:34, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the highlights, especially on the haunch and legs 21:35, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just got rid of the highlights. 00:57, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs. Branchwing (talk) 01:31, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:42, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

For some reason, it really looks like the whole haunch has a highlight or something, because it's a shade lighter than the rest of the image. So perhaps tone that down - just a suggestion, not if you don't want to

It's not a highlight, per say, just a section without shading that I'd rather not touch. 23:56, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

But it looks a completely different color than other areas that shouldn't have shading.

It's not, though. I believe that the shading is darker there than elsewhere, making the unshaded areas look lighter. I can lighten it, if you'd like. 03:34, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

But there shouldn't be shading in those areas, like near the chest fur. Comparing those two gives me two totally different colors, and even comparing the unshaded part of the tail and the haunch looks different. Unless those two areas are in shading, which they should't be; otherwise basically everything but the haunch part would be in shading and that makes no sense.

I don't know what to say. There's no shading or highlights on the haunch or the other lighter areas. I honestly think that the fact the shading on the haunch is darker than it is elsewhere, possibly combined with the texture, is making look lighter than it is. That seems to be the only explanation, and if it's not, I have no idea how to fix it. 03:44, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think just darkening the whole hatch by adding shading on top of that part would solve the issue, or trying to mess with the shading opacities in those areas. It really does appear to be two different shades - I don't think it just looks lighter because of the particular shading in those areas, from a basic colorpicking comparison, it really is lighter

Reuploaded. How's this? 19:54, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Perfect :) CBA

Skunkpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Fail.

Very pretty! Maybe define the shading a bit, and there is a little white speck on ---> shoulder blade from the white on the chest. And maybe smudge the ear pink a little more? Keep up the good work! Cosmokitten (talk) 00:44, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white <span style="">00:44, 5/19/2017

If I'm correct, the white on the <-- paw should cover all of it. 00:46, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be white on the stomach as per the StarClan image? <span style="">01:24, 5/19/2017

re-up Thanks Cosmo!

Oh dang I forgot about the earpink. I'll get to it later

Maybe blur the white or smooth it out on the stomach and chest. Looks too sharp compared to the StarClan <span style="">04:19, 5/19/2017

re-up

Could you smooth it out ever more? Not the white you smudged apart, but the white on the chest just looks like a strip of color. <span style="">17:12, 5/20/2017

I'll just ask Sziri how they did it, otherwise I'll just fail that.

re-up Hopefully it looks better now.

Perhaps define the shading depth a little? 15:00, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Also I realized that the nose wasn't filled in.

Can you define shading a little more and smooth it on the back leg closest to us?

Brighten the chest white; looks grayish

re-up may or may not have reupped before.

I think the white on the chest could be brightened a little more. 20:32, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

re-up So many layers. ..

Define the shading on the back half of the cat. Idk if it's just me, but I can barely see any. 03:31, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little bit. 19:45, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

White looks gray everywhere but the <--- front paw and <--- toe on the other front paw (I hope that makes sense). 01:48, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Daisytoe (A) ~ For Approval
Disneytoe's my last image before I become a warrior! Go go go! --

Good job Neon! Maybe define the eye depth, unless there is some already. Cosmokitten (talk) 10:18, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Decided that even though there was depth that it needed some definition. Fixed. --

Define the shading a bit? I like this, good job! Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:55, May 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smooth/smudge the shading on the top of the hindleg closest to us and the base of the tail. 13:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit, it looks flat. 19:35, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like all the shading could be smoothed out tbh <span style="">19:48, 5/19/2017

I believe the mickey mouse head on the chest is facing the wrong way. On the warrior and kit image, the head is facing sideways. This has it facing right side up. The patch on the back should be further up the back near the shoulders and the ears on the mickey head on the haunch need to be smaller. There should also be a tiny patch of gray on the furthest back paw. And I feel like all of the gray could be a tiny bit softer. 20:07, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Define shading depth more. 00:12, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

How's this? It turned out I errored when re-uploading, so my first re-upload was the same image as the first. --

Maybe desaturate the purple? I had the same problem, don't worry, but it seems too light/colorful. Maybe darken in a few ticks? And smooth it out? <span style="">15:47, 5/20/2017

Re-ups --

The shading could be smoothed out on the belly, and > half of the cat overall

Define the shading, the shading depth, define the eye depth, smooth the ear pink. 14:46, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail. <span style="">19:37, 5/22/2017

Still working?

Re-ups sure i am --

I don't think it reuploaded correctly - It looks like the same image as the one before. 09:37, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

On the mickey mouse head on the haunch, the ears need to be smaller in comparison to the "head" circle. 15:24, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt. W) ~ CBA
Did I have too much fun with the tinted shading again? Yes, yes I did. 03:54, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Dull the tint a little bit? The purple tint stands out quite a bit against brown on my screen. Branchwing (talk) 22:01, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I've used a purple-ish tint before on a cat with brown before, but I did dull the tint down a bit. 02:11, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you vary the stripe pattern some? No one shoot me - I've been told to alter stripes on images of mine before because of them being too uniform/straight across, and there are instances of us redoing images with this type of stripe pattern before, so to avoid that happening...maybe add a dorsal stripe/ mess with it some.

Reups Thanks Spooky! 00:36, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

I know it is white, but the shading makes the shaded white parts look gray. Maybe lighten those.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  08:20, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 15:43, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
I waited 4 days, so I pretty sure I can repost this now. ErmineGlow (talk) 15:22, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

If you still have the gray a reddish tint, you need to match it to solid gray to the other images, the shading looks blotchy so smooth it out, define the shading depth, and define the light. 15:42, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I might have to re-do the shading ErmineGlow (talk) 21:41, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

The image is still tinted red, could you please fix that? Smooth out tail shading as well. Branchwing (talk) 21:57, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Should I alter the tint again? ErmineGlow (talk) 23:49, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light abd define the shading depth. 23:52, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Le better? ErmineGlow (talk) 02:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define light more, mainly on the legs. 02:12, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:14, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs and on the back. 13:26, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:52, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

There's lighter parts on the legs? If those are highlights, smooth them out a lot. 01:09, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups look better now? ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs. 22:02, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

dull down the highlights `

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 01:36, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Thin out the shading? It looks a little blocky. 02:25, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Adding onto Shypaw's comment, nearly the entire image looks under shading? Maybe expand the light source in a few places? I'm not sure if that's what Shypaw meant or not 03:08, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I'm not sure I like the highlights anymore. :/ ErmineGlow (talk) 12:53, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/smooth the shading out on the back legs, near the flank, along with the shoulder, and maybe define the shading depth on the neck, just below the head? If I'm wrong then ignore this; her other images don't have highlights, so this wouldn't have any. 13:54, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:10, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

There's shading waste everywhere surrounding the image

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:15, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like there is still a little bit of a highlight on the front leg closest to us on my screen. Also smooth the shading on the said leg. 21:23, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading depth a tiny bit 21:33, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Minnowkit (CotC) (Kit) ~ CBA
half smudged shading, half blurred 00:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Define the nose color?

I don't really mean to be rude or ignore your comment, but why/how exactly would I have to define it? He's a dark cat so I gave him a dark pink colour and I can't exactly make it bigger or expand it...do you want me to lighten it? I personally think that'd look awkward then, and I purposefully gave him a darker colour, but if others disagree, I can lighten it. :) 00:56, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

I actually meant that i couldn't see any nose color so whoops.

Oh, so I wouldn't have to change anything then? 01:13, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad

Reuploaded. 22:00, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

sorry but the shading looks too purple to m? I thought he was half purple for a second. 00:56, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the leg shading and tail shading 06:29, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

I thought shading tint was artists choice? Reuploaded. 13:52, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

only if it isn't throwing anything else off. that was, 15:03, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Did you change the tint at all? I'm still seeing a really purple cat.

Reuploaded I'm pretty sure I changed it...oh well, tried again, hope it's good now. 03:03, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Shyheart (Ki) - For Approval
First image as a warrior, right? 00:16, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and define shading depth, smooth the ear pink. 00:17, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Add stripes. She was described as a tabby <span style="">00:22, 5/22/2017

I don't know if the fur needs to be wavy at all, if not just ignore this. Maybe make it a little browner? It looks kind of yellowish to me. 00:26, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten it, because it seems too dark to be light brown. Also where did it say she was described as a tabby, Broken?

Reuploaded 00:46, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Uhh....I don't think the changes are showing?

Reuploaded I could see the changes fine, but I reuploaded just in case. Also, one reason it may not be showing is because I reuploaded just before I got your first comment, then reuploaded again, but idk. :P 00:53, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little on the face on on the top of the <-- front leg. Looks cute! 01:16, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 01:23, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define/expand the shading on the ---> front leg. 02:01, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Erm, idk if you added stripes, but she was never called a tabby. Slightly wavy fur does not mean tabby. Not sure where Broken got the tabby thing from, though.

Reuploaded It was just really hard-edged texture, but it should be fixed now. 02:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on head/face, tail, and back paw?

Reuploaded 03:07, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

My eyes might've tricked me into seeing "tabby" I don't know, my eyes do that a lot xD The brown still looks tinted orange to me <span style="">10:32, 5/22/2017

There looks like there are a couple of bold spots of shading near the tail on <--- front leg and one on the hindleg, right next to ---> front leg. 13:23, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:58, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

It kinda looks like there's a random tuft of lighter fur in the > ear that shouldn't be there, but maybe that's my screen

Reuploaded 21:43, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Fixed a few things. 00:24, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on ---> leg, and maybe smooth out the shading a little overall? Nice image. 20:37, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 03:32, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice more Fixed some things. 00:42, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth 03:06, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:20, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little bit on the flank (or what it's called, I'm talking about the area above the back paw). 19:37, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:18, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail a little bit? c: <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 20:52, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:17, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (W) ~ For Approval
gd this looks awful

Maybe define the texture a little bit, I can't really see it. At least, I think there's supposed to be texture on this based on the ES image. 20:53, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
 * Adding onto that, just wondering, how come the kit image doesn't have texture? Was it purposeful? 20:54, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded The kit does have texture - I still have the layers for it, actually. It's just not super super visible.

Make the stripes on the haunch go around the entire body, and give them slight variation.

Reuploaded

could you give the stripes a little more variation and make them a little bit more pointed?

Reuploaded I really hesitate to give the stripes very much more variation, seeing as the kit image's > side shows what this would show, and there isn't much variation there. And even on the ES there isn't a ton, and since that's a different side, it doesn't need to match 100%

Maybe define the shading depth a little? 03:06, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Brownpaw (Ki) - CBA
I've just had this sitting around for a bit and I didn't have any other pre-made chararts so.. Here it is 22:03, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ginger on the < front leg would be on the < side instead of where it is now, because on the star, we can see that its on the < elbow.

You need the file danny? The orange needs to be smudged, not blurred <span style="">18:37, 5/24/2017

reups It is smudged, it's just really hard to make it match with this tiny blank 00:36, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Hazel Burrow (App) - For Approval
20:07, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the legs. Branchwing (talk) 21:40, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading overall 00:28, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Seedpelt (MV) (E) - For Approval
23:26, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten and/or smooth out the shading a bit.

Re-uploaded. 20:14, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Red Claw (W) - For Approval
All colors from the ES image, since I can't remember where I placed the rogue and loner images... but since they're all by me, they have the same coloring.

Define and/or sharpen the texture? It's more visible and distinct on the other image. 15:00, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Milkweed (W) ~ For Approval
07:15, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

i know this pattern is goddamn hard to work with, but can you define the shading? I can't really see it on the image.

reuploaded 06:59, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

the ginger is definitely brighter and more visible on her other images. like its not so delicate if u get what i mean Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:16, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

no, I don't. 11:08, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

I think they're saying that the ginger here is duller than the ginger on her queen.

comparing the base I've got to the lightest ginger on the queen produces the same colour, so I'm not sure what you want me to do about it. 18:59, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

I know it doesn't have to match perfectly but could you possibly add a little more ginger to the shoulder and hind leg? It just looks like those spots have more ginger on the rogue

Hawkfoot (Star) - For Approval
shading her dark face...
 * shudders*  06:06, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading on her main body?

Skateboardingcow21 personal  - Declined
Me real guy (talk) 16:20, May 26, 2017 (UTC) skateboardingcow101

You're not allowed to post personal chararts on the approval page? 16:22, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

If it's a personal image you don't need to approve it. ErmineGlow (talk) 17:31, May 26, 2017 (UTC)



Declined because, as said above, personal images don't need to approved. Only art that goes on character pages does.