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Littlecloud(mc alt 2) ~ for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to the alt mentioned above by Echo, this would have to be renamed File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. Mind fixing that real quick Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^

17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The darker stripes on the face should be thinner, and all of the stripes should be more jagged^^ There's also a slight layer of texture going underneath them, on the mca ~

Define your light source. Its pretty hard to distinguish it. If you need help with it, you may find the Apprentice Tutorials helpful. 16:43 Sun Dec 30

Still working? 00:05, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

If you are still working, there's this area outside the right hind leg that shouldn't be filled in. I'll send you a screenshot later when I have time to get on the computer.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:26, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go!Potato Flakin (talk) 04:24, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, sorry for the break, I just had thingd going on, and life, but I got it up! : )Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:57, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, that shading tho! I dont know what I was doing, but I fixed the shadingIm Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yes, much better. There are some things that still need to be addressed, but take your time. The stripes need to be smudged and sharpened a bit more. I would recommend you take the colors of his apprentice, or medicine cat apprentice. The earpink is much lighter on the other images, and the two stripes on the face are blotchy. Seperate them so they are two stripes, then smooth and sharpen them to match the kit. Whiten the white, and define the shading (have you tried tinting your shading? It's magic) This is very good Owlbite, you are doing well.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I sort-of like it.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite! Whiten the white on the legs, thin out the face stripes, and define the shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:12, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, face stripes cant get any thiner. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:26, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I understand. Where's your lightsouce here? If there is one please define it. Potato Flakin (talk) 04:29, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading too? I can't tell where the light source is either, but I think that may just be because I can't make out where a lot of the shading is. 13:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC) I will definitely the light, but look at the light in the eyes.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 16:38, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't have white markings or pale around the earpink^

Lighten the earpink a little more, and remember, don't stress, the lightsource and other things are and easy fix, take your time.=)Potato Flakin (talk) 01:36, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

spooky, look at the offical art, look, there is white marks. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:59, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I cut the white down, but it is there on the offical art, and if I define the shading, it will make it look... just... bad. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:06, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I’m quite sure it’s supposed to be that pale color around the ears. I matched the same image you’re matching to when I did the other images in this alt set

Re-up, okay.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 03:03, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Owlbite, don't kill me, but I'm still very confused about your lightsource. I cannot see where the shading is.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:30, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that help? I removed some shading from the direct place of the light sorce, wich needed to be fixed anyways.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:00, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the shading darker? i think it'll make it more visible. that pattern is looking good 11:44, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, yeet.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:41, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png not Littlecoud -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:38, 1/09/2019 ]

Actually, it's not fully wrong. There's just a duplicate of File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png that's spelled wrong. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:40, 1/09/2019 ]

Define shading every but the paws. Define light on the paws. It's coming along! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:55, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, sorry about my splng!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:56, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry if it's a bother, but the paws' light could still be defined greatly. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 23:00, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I tryed, let me know if it needs more.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:10, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a lot of depth to the shading. I cannot see it. Also the leg stripes seem to be ending abruptly..?Potato Flakin (talk) 23:19, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that is as dark as it will get, if you need me to do it more, msg me on discord, okay? because I need to talk to you, and get your help(and you cant do that here).<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:39, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the stripe at the top of the tail tip; it should be thicker to match the mca, and also even out the coloring and amount of the stripes on the front legs; there should be at least 5 on the < front leg, and 4 on the > front one

Re-up, the count seems a little... over of a responce, but I did it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:50, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light everywhere. You may find the apprentice tutorials helpful.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:16, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes a LOT. The leg stripes especially are unintelligible from everything else. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:28, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

The base color on the back leg nearest to us has white on the edges, the ear pink could be a little more defined. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:37, 1/10/2019 ]

Realized it is in the mca, sorry. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:38, 1/10/2019 ]

There's some waste outside this ear.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:52, January 11, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm.. also what color are the berries? One screen tells me they're white but another screen tells me it's light green.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:05, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

cant work, im away from my drawing tablet, but the berries, I thought they were leaves, and they had little white flowers on them, I looked it up for refrence then first making it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:50, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

catmint and borage were the plants<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:55, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Creative idea Owlbite! But since I'm confused about the color of the berries, I think they should be one color.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:38, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

there are no berries, they are flowers, and they are ment to be purple.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

The berries and leaves and be whatever color you want. Could you also make your pupil black? In addition, you seem to be having some trouble with light source. The shading should, for the limbs, only be on one side and not cover the entire limb. That's how we get that "3D effect" to show mass and depth. Your lightsource seems to be coming from the right, so the shading should only be on the left side of the limbs. What you have going on with the tail, flank and face is good. I've created a red line to help ya! Try to keep the shading to one side of the limbs like I demonstrated in red (the arrow is the direction your light is hitting your cat), even when blurring it. I hope this helps! ^^ 01:21, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

I WILL re-up later today or tomarow, but im working with photoshop, and it crashed ;~;' and school... but I WILL get them up!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:16, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, FINALY! And Vec, about making it black, as I have been told, and as I will say, that is my prefrence, and if you want, I will make it darker, but I prefer to not have it black. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:50, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink, I'm not seeing it. Colorpick off the apprentice possibly?Potato Flakin (talk) 03:00, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

re-up, all the colors are 100% correct. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more, and there's no stripes on the white part of the paws.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:13, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh, I was unaware the pupil didn't have to be black. My apologies, then. ^^ 13:27, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, OH! now I see whatseemed off on the stripes! I couldnt tell! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 15:47, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes on the face? On his other images the lighter areas and stripes on his body appear more textured (not sure how else to describe it), could you try making them a rougher to match? On his other images, there's only four, thicker stripes on his tail too. You've improved so much since your first upload, keep it up!

16:37, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:12, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading? 13:17, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the shading. Define the light on the herbs and lighten the face stripes to match this. I like this!Potato Flakin (talk) 02:04, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the face stripes are correct, I adsked spooky for the color hex.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:27, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Burnt. I can't see the shading well. Please define the shading.

Thin out the face stripes again and define the earpink. I think you're overblurring the earpink which is making it disappear.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:20, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Shrink the yellow highlights; the app and kit have them, but they're very small patchy like things

Still working? You have until the 28th to reupload, which will trigger the one month limit. 16:43, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

ill give you the short, my art computer is my brothers, he dose homwork on it, and he got alot of homwork, and my computer broke, I just got it back on, re-up soon, later today probably.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 18:08, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, thank Starclan! I was working on this, and had to stop for a while, and in that time, the power shut off for a minut, and before, it crashed photoshop, so I am so happy it didnt this time!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:45, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Shading tints are magic =) Anyways, the shading is a little big on the legs, it doesn't need to cover that much of the paw. Earpink is still overblurred as well, and define eye depthPotato&#61;) (talk) 23:47, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the ear pink was not over blured, please dont assume it was, and if anything, I messed up the ear pink, because it it nolonger the same color as the others, but if you need it like this, okay, can I get another opinion of if it was seeable before? and the shading... what leg? and eyes are fine, 100% color picked from the image.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:00, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

You got some waste in these areas - this is looking so good! —​​​​​​

Shouldn't have that yellow highlight on the center of the chest, they're only spread around the pelt/edges of the chest to match what the TUG image has. Also I think the issue with eye depth is because the pupil blends into the eye color, making them look purple-blue, when the other alts eyes are pure blue. You don't have to make the pupil pure black, but it should be more distinguishable from the main eye color

Recede leg shading, legs look very purplePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:42, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, i like the shading now, it looks almost... 3D.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:52, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

The shading shouldn't cover the paws that much.. please recede itPotato&#61;) (talk) 02:55, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light majorly on all legs. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:02, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, re did the light. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 04:45, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Pose is from a reference, I can show it if need be. <span style="">20:10 Wed Jan 2

Sun these are absolutely astounding! Could you add either a tag or bell to the collar? There’s usually one. :) 20:16, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

Soooo cute! Can you move the collar a little bit down the neck? It kinda looks like it's choking them right now.. ^^' Also, the forearm closest to us looks overly thick. 23:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

woah!! love everyhting on this charart, i cant wait to see the next one. Starclanwilldarkme2 (talk) 00:16, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing, Sun! Could you possibly make that <-- front leg a bit longer to match the length of the other? It seems a bit shorter. 03:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the lineart on the hind paws just a bit? 03:56, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

The front paw facing us feels a bit too chubby compared to the rest of the legs. Also, while I do understand what you're going for with the lil fatty fluff on the haunch to define the tummy, it looks a bit off. Plump cats don't really have their fat protruding past their haunch, and with them laying down like this, the fat would go lower to touch the ground bc of gravity. These are super cute ;; I adore the toe beans so so much!! —

Could be my personal preferences, but could you make the long haired's fur less.. spiky and give it more variation?

Hi Sun! You don’t have a limit like other art and take the time you need, but I just wanted to confirm that you’re still working? :) 17:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I am! I'm just trying to enjoy my last week of break before the semester! I'll upload soon! <span style="">18:46 Tue Jan 8

I love it! If it dosent get aproved here, my wiki, Complete Warriors Wiki needs some. :) -Texaswild

No real rush, Sun, but this is just a bump in case you've gotten busy and forgotten about the blanks. (and also a reminder that they're still here in case anyone needs to comment) ​​​​​​

--> this eye should be moved slightly or expanded in size.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:28, January 16, 2019 (UTC)​

Reuploaded This semester is gonna be hell. <span style="">17:20 Mon Jan 21

What's going on with the lines here on the short-furred blank? Slightly confused, and I assume it's just an oversight? ​​​

On both, could you thicken the lineart on the bottomside of the... I guess it'd be the wrist(?) of the > front leg?

The collars need to be moved down, they look like they're chokingPotato&#61;) (talk) 20:51, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

Woah what the hell happened to that...I'll check my layers in a little while. No clue why it did that. <span style="">23:21 Mon Jan 21

Um <-- this front leg on the longhair is thicker than said leg on shorthair, and the --> this eye's lineart on the longhair is thinner than the lineart of the shorthair's eyePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:11, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Apprentice Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I'm absolutely proud :) All colours from the alt star. Comments? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

You should be proud! Define the shading on the tail and paws? 18:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shading a little on the shoulder back and haunch, add some to the forelegs and hindlegs farthest from us and soften the stripes, maybe add a handful more if you're able. This is very good! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:47, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the stripes some too? 18:51, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Screams bc I keep forgetting to mention things. Sharpen the gold on the shoulder and foreleg a little, and there's waste between the whiskers. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Is it better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

<-- this hind leg needs more white, there's a lot on the warrior alt. Also friendly reminder to upload under File:Feathertail.apprentice.alt2.png. It was misspelled earlier (it's fixed now)Potato Flakin (talk) 23:15, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm and the stripe placement would end up matching the warrior, as would everything else to it, since the warrior's the first in the set. Would you mind adding some white/very pale gray hairs up into the earpink, to match the set? I also think there'd be more, but thinner, stripes on the tail. You're doing excellent with this, by the way

Could you define/add some more stripes on the front paw furthest from us and the back paw furthest from us? And add some cream to the hind paw furthest from us too. 03:25, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Nice image overall. I'll promote you into an apprentice.

Reups <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Could you maybe blur the white a little bit on her right front paw? -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:42, 1/10/2019 ]

Sure, I'll do it when I'll come home :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Reups :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Could you define the shading overall, especially on the gray? 22:03, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I do think there'd need to be more visible pale parts on the belly and haunch, alt. warrior seems to have them, and that's first in set

Reups any better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Also I'm not going to be able to work on it till tomorrow morning (UTC time) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

The shading seems blotchy, for a lack of a better word. It seems to be darker in places and non-existent where it should be (for example the legs). It's also overblurred in places.

Reupsss <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Can you darken the shading on the forelegs please. 13:00, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the inside hind leg. Your doing great! ^^

13:57, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Can you define the shading depth on all the legs? I think the stripes on the face need to be connected to the eyes too. Might be my eyes, but there appears to be leaky shading on the back. On the hind leg closest to us, maybe move the white so it's against the line art of the haunch? it looks a little off in the middle like it is. It also appears less soft on the warrior. You've done a great job on this so far!!

21:23, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

The base looks a bit too light, could you darken it a bit? Sharpen the white too.

01:03, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit to match the roughness the ones on the other images have, if you would

On the front paws, the white doesn't match the placement portrayed on the star, and it's leaking a bit. —​​​​​​

Reups --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 08:16, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the white a bit more? might be my eyes, but it looks like it hasn't changed at all.

16:44, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, any specific places it should be sharpened? --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 20:26, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

For reference. The red is where the white should be on the paw if you're following the star's pattern of having white underarms, blue is where the white is leaking, and green is where the white needs to be sharpened. —​​​​​​

Ok, thanks! --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 10:50, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups yep yep :) --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 12:35, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

We should hardly be able to see white on the shoulder looking at the other alts, and there's too much white on <- side of the haunch. you're getting there! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 14:57, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 16:12, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the hind paw furthest from us? 13:17, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do it when my brother will give me the computer --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 20:23, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded--<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 09:20, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:51, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the stripes should be sharpened, and the shading on the -> front leg should be defined. There should be shading on the face and remove some of the shading on all the paws so they don't look so gray.

Reups --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 11:48, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

The blob of white on the hindleg closest to us looks off and I believe still that the shoulder white should be lessened to just barely be visible upon looking at her other two TUG alts. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 17:30, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

I don't understand what you mean about the hind leg... Should I sharpen the white or remove it? --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat  19:34, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 19:59, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the > back white paw, as well

Reups There you go --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat  11:40, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Tortoiseshell queen (RC, OS-1) ~ For Approval
First time doing a tortoiseshell. I tried.

23:21, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good, are torties suppose to have white if they aren't cited on it? Also can you define the shading. 23:23, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm this needs to have more patches. Tortoiseshells have a lot of patterns, you can choose which one you want.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:58, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Mink's right. She's cited as a tortoiseshell so no white. And the tortoiseshell pattern is honestly Thunder's choice...they can add more when they remove the white. Add some shading to <-- side of the face and smooth out all the shading, too. 00:01, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the front legs. Waste beside the <- front leg

Blur the patches and there's waste outside <-- this front leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:24, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

easiest way to get around the dumb no white thing is to just make it cream or something if you don't want to get rid of it. 09:23, January 18, 2019 (UTC)'

Darken the patches that are supposed to be black, they look dark gray at the moment. 14:24, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry fellas

18:23, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

I can't really see the shading at all. Can you darken and define it everywhere? 18:52, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded better?

19:15, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front leg closest to us. 20:07, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

20:40, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

There's this light gray patch on --> this hind leg and define the shading s'more.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:15, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste floating around the > back leg and > front leg

Could you blend the patches in with the base more? (either by smudging or blurring, whichever floats your boat)

Reuploaded

03:39, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Random gray patch on said hind leg in previous comment is still there.Potato&#61;) (talk) 04:34, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

04:46, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the patches and define and smooth the shading all over. Also, maybe add a patch on the head so it does not look plain in comparison to the rest of the body. 14:41, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ---> ear? 18:00, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's still some waste kinda noodling around. If you're using GIMP I'd probably recommend filling the backdrop of the lineart layer with some random color, color selecting that, then erasing on each layer with a huge brush. That should catch all of it at once

I don't see any wastePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:47, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

I just highlighted each pixel that had it, but I can provide individual screenshots for each bit if necessary. It's definitely there.

just checked, there is defintely some by the --> front paw and base of the tail.

01:55, January 20, 2019 (UTC) Reuploaded Think I got it all.

05:50, January 20, 2019 (UTC) Add shading depth everywhere.

Add depth to the eyes. 15:39, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:09, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

There appears to be some missing shading on the chest? Where the orange patch appears to be brighter. Also, could you add more depth to the shading on the stomach?

Reuploaded 19:47, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the <-- foreleg. It seems the shading covers most of that and I can't really see the light. 10:18, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

RiverClan Minor Tabby Apprentice ~ CBA
Much, much more confident about this Malina457 (talk) 06:03, January 20, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Define the tail and facial shading just a bit? I like the stripes! 06:27, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes along the shoulder and back haunch? —​​​​

I feel the amount of stripes is fine, and Flametail's alt has even less than this does. ​​​​

Blur the stripes and lighter parts a teensy bit more.

14:45, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes unless the gray is intentionalPotato&#61;) (talk) 16:53, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes aren't gray? Malina457 (talk) 17:00, January 20, 2019 (UTC)malina

They don't look gray on my screen. I believe they're yellowish, which look perfectly fine to me. ​​

There was a slight bit of white waste in the <-- eye so I fixed it. reups Malina457 (talk) 17:20, January 20, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups again I changed the shading tint, red wasnt having it Malina457 (talk) 17:28, January 20, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Not sure if it's just me, but I feel like the stripes, especially on the legs/haunch, look like triangle stripes, which have been tweaked out in the past. Can you possibly elongate them and give more variation?

Im not even sure what that means? Malina457 (talk) 13:17, January 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

Triangle stripes are stripes with wider bases and smaller ends with little variation and often straight lines. I can kinda see where Fox is talking about with the lower three stripes on the haunch. Try ticking their edges/making them jagged, not making them super straight, or even adding a slight curve like the first neck stripe. Small alternations should do the trick. ^^ 16:39, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 01:22, January 22, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Hm. The three stripes at the top of the haunch still appear as triangle ones, can you alter those?

reups better? Malina457 (talk) 20:45, January 22, 2019 (UTC)malina

Hm. The issue is that they start wider and get thinner by point, so they're still the same shape as before^^ Could you rearrange them, so they aren't a triangle's overall shape still?

Should I connect them? Malina457 (talk) 01:16, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

That could possibly help! 02:30, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

reups hows that Malina457 (talk) 02:42, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups for waste Malina457 (talk) 13:14, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

CBA? I love the colors on this! 13:53, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Leader Blanks - For Approval
Uploading on my personal for now since its easier to work with. I plan on fluffing up the longhaired tail...which as I look at my cats the tails are slightly too long and I'll fix that next upload as well. <span style="">16:54 Sun Jan 20 2019

Cool! Can you shrink the ears by the smallest amount and make em more pointy? I love this BreezeyPotato&#61;) (talk) 17:46, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add whiskers? :) 18:14, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'd think Breezey would add the whiskers once everything else is all said and done, mainly because that seems like the least important thing, compared to making sure the anatomy and whatnot (read: floof) is correct. =P ​​

The shorthair's tail is a bit lumpy, could you make it more consistent in width? It's mostly where the tail curls Eggheart (talk) 22:07, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tails could be shortened a tad, it might be just me but they seem pretty long. 22:12, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

im gonna be the one who says it fluff those longhair tails up lul 22:19, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the lineart around the eyes more even? 22:20, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the lineart on the longhair's chest furPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:44, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Make the eyes a bit rounder. 03:12, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

Paws look big for the legs, and make the jaws evenPotato&#61;) (talk) 02:57, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Paws look fine to me Malina457 (talk) 17:43, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

The ears look a bit big for a “standard” kitty. Maybe shrink them a wee bit. Seems more like an oriental build when looking at those ears anatomy wise. <span style="">21:24, 01/23/2019

Please read comments before and my own before commenting. <span style="">2:07 Thu Jan 24 2019

I'm not 100% sure that was necessary, Breezey. There's a lot of comments on this and it's possible other comments hadn't been seen.

Ashfur (Alt Star) - CBA
He deserved so much more than just being thrown into StarClan and being forgotten about. —​

Pretty kitty. Smooth out the shading on the flank a bit? 02:30, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :D —

I'm not sure if you did this already (and my laptop has been horrible with blues/greens), but does this match the colors Ashfur has cited for his eye color? I really can't tell and my laptop is not helping.

He's cited with dark blue, so yeah. I added a touch of green in the shading but it shouldn't be seen that differently I don't think. —

Nah, I was just asking since my laptop's been weird with coloring lately. CBA?

Skinny gray rogue ~ For Approval
eh.

Could you darken the shading by just a few ticks? 13:28, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Hmm it looks like the shading is leaking from the back at the top of the haunch? Probably shouldn't be with this source iirc

Re-uploaded I couldn't find the leaking but I think it was due to texture.

Omg this texture is so nice!! Could you define the shading depth a bit? 02:47, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks! Is this better?

Black-and-white BloodClan cat (Ro) - CBA
I'm having a little too much fun with some brushes I have. Oreo cats shall rule. ​

This is really good, reminds of the vitiligo cats. Could you define the shading the haunch and tail? 09:53, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also changed the collar because I felt like it.

Love this! CBA? 13:35, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Rosetail (Alt E) ~ CBA
19:25, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad, this is purdyPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:42, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Just so you know, there're patches of yellow/light brown (#976b47) between the stripes. Also FYI base color: 78503a. But this matches very well! Also I feel like the shading is defined enough. Anymore definition and it'll look too dark.

Re-uploaded. Altered the colors^^ 02:09, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? really love this alt set, the stripes are a+

Sorreltail (Star Alt) ~ For Approval
I'll dull the shading down on my next upload. 01:47, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define light on --> this leg and shading on opposite legPotato&#61;) (talk) 03:00, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the light clearly on both as well as shading. Could I ger another opinion on that possibly? 03:28, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

I can't really see it. Also, is this meant to be ginger-and-white? Could you brighten the white up? ​​​

I mean, it is but I coloredpicked from the icon on the site so.. I'd rather keep it on that but I can brighten it if I have too. I think the shading will darken some when I dull it and darken the shading in general but there is light on the legs. 04:10, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I changed the tint, this purple/blue seems to blend better. I also changed her eyes to match. I can still change the white though if I have too. 06:16, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

If it's meant to be white, then I would go ahead and brighten it. It's not gonna hurt anything. 13:08, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

aw this is rly cute. can you smooth out the shading on the main body? 13:32, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm could you smooth the shading on the < side of the chest, and also add some at the base? I also think the facial shading could use a tad more depth

Re-Ups, thanks Burnt! 05:27, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Forest Of Secrets Minor Rogue 3 - For Approval
Second tabby and first rogue let's see how it goes <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:39, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could ylu possibly define your light source? I'm finding it a bit hard to see, it could just be the lighting on my phone if not. 10:21, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the light source fine. Could you define the shading depth a little on the paler part of the tail?

13:46, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

I kinda agree with Minkclaw, particularly on the legs. It's hard for be to distinguish the shading there, but it could just be the pale parts. 13:52, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (Alt. DF) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:07, January 24, 2019 (UTC)