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Nightwing (W) - Tweaked
Shading and earpink tweak. OA was Icy. 04:44, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

She looks sort of a blackish/blueish right now, though it may just be may computer... o3o 18:07, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

That was on purpose. She's tinted slightly blue to blend the shading together more. 07:33, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and make the earpink maybe one shade lighter to match the queen, please. x3 15:36, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's that? x3 04:31, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks a bit blotchy. Maybe make the "highlight" on the haunch a bit bigger 03:34, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarstar (L) ~ Tweaked
how can i fail so much on just a muzzle Yeah, just added a gray muzzle ;p Should I make it lighter? 20:24, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, this shade is good. Could you blur/smudge it some more at the edges, so it looks more like it's fading color, instead of a patch of random fur color? (does that make any sense whatsoever? :l) 03:02, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Also darken it a bit so it doesn't look like an extension of the white on his chest, but something that's just lightening from age. 20:53, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't worry, it makes sense xD And I darkened the muzzle too. 16:25, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you attempt to dark the base pelt just a smidge? He's dark gray, and right now, he seems more neutral.

Reuploaded  18:30, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) - Redone
I asked Cloudy in chat and she said that I could redo this, because I was having trouble. OA was Stoney, and it needed to be lighter. Comments? x3 04:14, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 04:16 Thu Nov 22

Darken it just a tad, as well. There's also waste around the entire image.

Re-uploaded: Pixlr's wand tool is a pain. x3 04:25, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit flat in my opinion. Can you define it a bit more? 20:45, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Try and smudge the ear-pink in more than one place; it looks kinda odd with just one smudge, and blur it a touch 03:43, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:44, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Nightstar (L) ~ Tweaked
ifailedk he was tweaked to look battered, and OA was paleh 15:21, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if I make any sense, but can you make the scars go with the shading, like have the shading on top of the scars that are in the shading area. :3 16:17, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars at the top of his shoulder/neck. They look a little too sharp. 17:12, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, they should be under the shading. Tell me if you have any problems with that, I could just send you the file with the shading so you can put it under if you need it. 19:56, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

It'd be great if you could, Paleh. ^^ 22:50, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I ruined paleh's pretty image ._. 05:18, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (W) ~ Redone
redone for stripe issuses. OA was like...Wildy, I think. 02:26 Sat Nov 24

Darken the shading 03:44, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:46 Sat Nov 24

Webfoot (A) ~ Redone
OA was the beautiful Tatum. Comments? 02:41, 24, 11, 2012

Can you make the stripes match Berry's image more? Maybe add the stripe of black that goes from his head down to the tip of his tail? 18:26, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was LeafstrikeAsakura, and I moved teh eye. 10:15 Sat Nov 24

Is there a way you can add a little depth on the missing eye? 05:35, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

I created it the same way the missing eye was before, but if anyone else agrees, I'll do so. 05:36 Sun Nov 25

One-eye (Alt Q) - Tweaked
OA was one of the three best mentors Paleh. 8D Tweaked the eyes. Comments? 00:44, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sunspots (Q) - Redone
Splooky's time ran out. Redone for problems with coloring of patches and something else... :-/ Anyway, Scarly gets another ginger and white kitty! Comments? 02:22, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, define the shading on the front legs and blur the shading on her belly. Nice job. :3 02:29 Sun Nov 25

The entire image is covered in shading, it seems. Can you lessen it up?

She seems a little cross-eyed. 02:30, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes may not be showing 02:50, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brambleberry (MC) ~ Redone
OA is Echomist, with a tweak by Ivy. Redone for multiple reasons. (meh I don't like this, I think I might redo it)

Expand the shading on the back of the shoulders a bit. 05:34, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing image and giving her to Ivy.

Reuploaded Alrighty...how's this? I incorprated parts of Cloudy's design and made a furry effect. I love this :D  06:37, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her a lot, she's still very gray. 08:36, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (Ro) - Redone
Redone to match elder. Comments? Don't think changes are showing yet 04:39, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Are there even stripes? o.o 04:42 Sun Nov 25

Re-uploaded forgot to tone the opacity of the shading dow 04:43, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Snowtuft (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, Mintstarr, and Insane (I think). Shading needed defined, colors needed to match, so on and so forth! 06:51, November 25, 2012 (UTC)