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Jake (Ki) ~ CBA
He has a cite, so I can post this, right? 13:12, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Lighten up the face shading a tad? Burntclaw (talk) 13:35, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, it's the same shade as the rest of the shading, and it's not that dark V_V 14:29, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. I can't tell they're there.

Reups 10:42, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define them again; still can't see them. I love this a lot he's adorable. =) 14:59, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes on his tail look fine, tbh. Define the leg shading just a little bit? 16:49, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reup 18:35, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

He looks very bright compared to his kittypet image. Maybe darken him a tad? — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:22, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's the same color. I colorpicked from it, and the only reason it looks that way is the shading on the kittypet, and the highlights on this. I will ask for the file, though, so I can make it match 110%. 13:56, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reups it definately matches now; got the file. 12:57, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Hmmm define the shading on the collar. Niiiiiice B) 00:41, 12/2/2014

wikia updated. Eww. 17:55, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 23:58 Thu Dec 4

Smokepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
prepare yourselves for a kit party! XD The shading isn't as bad as I thought it would be. --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:31, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. This is gorgeous though! The Fox Girl (talk) 02:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I really love everything about this picture! Could you lighten the face a smudge? NikiandCats (talk) 10:11, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:21, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can hardly se it. 09:27 Fri Nov 28

Define your light source please. Burntclaw (talk) 13:05, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:10, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is cute!

Reupload thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:25, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to give it some depth? 03:49, 11/30/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:10, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

He still looks flat. Try to blur it at a lower rate than you normally do. Also, define the shading on the legs. 04:24, 11/30/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:06, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Ok, instead of defining shading, we're gonna define the light. Define the light on the legs and tail. That should do the trick. 00:40, 12/2/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:39, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light in the tail? Burntclaw (talk) 10:02, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the forepaw closest to the back paw 15:37, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:08, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Pinestar (Ki) - CBA
Hi, my name is Jayce and I really love Pinestar. Have a baby version of him. PC implemented a thing saying all cats with confirmed littermates or parents get kit ranks, so here we go.

Blur the shading a bit more on the neck? Burntclaw (talk) 07:55, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you define the shading inbetween the legs a bit more? I love this=) 23:13, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I can see it pretty good, so I'll hold off on that for now. I don't like making that area overly dark since it usually just distorts the colors when I shade...mainly because I'm using black on this lmao.

Yeah, I can see it, it's fine, Jayce ^^ 03:49, 11/30/2014

Um just noticed this..define your lightsource; the face & tail says it's going this < way and the body and legs say it's going > this way. 19:24, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, I've used this source on all of my kits, as have many users before me. So, unless I get another opinion, I'd rather not change it. It's a fairly common and simple one and one I was told by many users was okay before.

It's fine, although could I ask you to define the shading on the legs a tiiiiiiiiiiiiny bit? 21:43, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Figured that was coming lmao.

CBA? 01:34, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Moonflower (Kit) - CBA
I bet in three seconds, someone will tell me to either redo the stripes or define the shading. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:18, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tiny bit? 10:36, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not happy about the stripes :\ by the way, if this image gets approved, will I become a warrior? (this is my third image) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups My sis told me to define the tail shading The Fox Girl (talk) 11:44, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

define the light on the right front paw? Nicely done! 21:08, 11/28/2014

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 06:29, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the right back paw, as with your lightsource there should be light there. This is gorgeous! =) 19:21, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 04:14, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shall we go CBA? I like this.

Snowbird (K) - For Approval
First character ever!! (I'm so proud of myself) Echorunner (talk) 12:50, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, I did it for you. This is amazing! :) maybe blur the shading more? There needs to be nose pink as well. This is very good for your first charart The Fox Girl (talk) 12:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

If you are a kit, it should say "For evaluation" instead of "For Approval"- Anyway, please define the shading on the tail and the legs, but great work! :) Burntclaw (talk) 12:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think you can define it everywhere. 13:00 Fri Nov 28

Plus, this should be called File:Snowbird.kit.png. I also fixed the thumbnail. 13:06 Fri Nov 28

Thanks! I'll remember next time!!!!

Remember to sign your posts with four "~"s, also, when ever you re-upload something, remember to notify us by writing something like Re-ups. XD Btw add shading to the legs plz. If you need help with the placement of the shading you can look at the apprentice tutorials. Also, the file is still not named correctly. Burntclaw (talk) 14:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

To rename it, just rename it in the next upload The Fox Girl (talk) 14:26, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, it makes less work for admins (maybe) if you wait and have an admin rename it for you. 14:54, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please, it's much easier to just let me rename it. Which I just have. I'm also gonna change the heading to "For Approval" since I think this is good for an apprentice-rank promotion tbh.

Along with defining the shading on the legs and tail, maybe add another layer of shading on top of the existing one at a lower opacity ro create some depth? 21:07, 11/28/2014

Blur the earpink a bit? The Fox Girl (talk) 07:12, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It looks plenty blurred enough to me. 21:36, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink, actually? 03:47, 11/30/2014

Sharpen the shading a bit, it looks flat. Burntclaw (talk) 00:15, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Just a friendly reminder: please remember to re-upload your image by Friday(Dec. 5th) or it may be declined. Since when you don't upload for seven days it is considered lack of work. (Yes I know this is a leads' job, but nobody had said anything so...please don't be mad at me). 19:26, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

She actually did, she just forgot to reup Burntclaw (talk) 02:45, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs, also define the shading on the tail. The Fox Girl (talk) 05:02, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Well I'm now just seeing changes so I don't believe she already did before I posted that message. Unless wikia is broken again. But if forgetting to say reup is the case, she could still get her image declined if we don't know what we're looking at. That's just the way the boat floats, and I'm just trying to warn her ahead of time before she has to experience that. Back to the image, define the facial shading and define the depth of the body shading. This is looking really good! 14:07, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lily (Ki) ~ For Approval
K so yeah. Siamese. meep. <span style="">11:12 Sat Nov 29

Smooth out the collar lineart, and bring the collar tag down. The collar tag is hanging from the collar, not behind it. 11:17, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the back a bit? Burntclaw (talk) 11:19, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, and the changes are here! <span style="">11:35 Sat Nov 29

Beautiful picture! Though the face could use a little smoothing out a bit. Just to fade into the tan colour of the cute cat ;3 Could you define the back just a smudge too? NikiandCats (talk) 14:15, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 15:54, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly tint the shading? It appears as though you've used black, but I think that a darker brown would suit the cream more. If not, that's fine by me. 19:38, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Try to make the collar a bit more, like, round, like on Millie's kit <span style="">01:21, 11/30/2014

Reups, <span style="">17:07 Mon Dec 1

It's still rather flat on the neck. Burntclaw (talk) 00:33, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

For the shading on the cream parts, I recommend tinting it a dark red. <span style="">00:37, 12/2/2014

Friendly reminder that shading tint is not required, so I believe if they were asked already and didn't tint the shading on the upload afterwards, I don't think you should ask them again unless they ask for shading tint suggestions. It's starting to become more commonplace and I'd like to really express that it is not mandatory and never will be. Using black is perfectly fine and both Lily and Rose do not have tinted shading on their kittypet images anyways. This doesn't mean go and nominate them to tint the shading. Plus, I think just thinning out the shading a bit would fix this just fine.

Goosefeather (Ki) - For Approval
how do i even do fur ruffles Brick   The Bite of '87  11:37, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples, I can't tell they are there. Lovely job :) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:39, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and inbetween the legs. This is amazing, Brick~ =) 18:18, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, also defined the tail shading a bit. and incase changes aren't showing Brick   The Bite of '87  11:57, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading on the face. Niiiice B) <span style="">00:35, 12/2/2014

Brightflower (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried out Jayie's shading style which I love <3. I adore her cute lil' muzzle. The eyes are larger because in her description it states that she has "wide-set amber eyes" so I just wanted to add emphasis on that. Colour & design taken from the warrior & queen pixels. all the kittens    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:51, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Forgot the pale paws. ._.    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:59, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I fixed the alignment for you^^ Also, define the stripes a bit, as they're more pronounced on her other images. And define the shading & shading depth. This is pretty =) 13:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the eyes are normal on the other images, and you //need// to match that, so make them normal size please. And define the shading. 13:53, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you Frosty for fixing the alignment! I've defined the stripes, shrunk the eyes, shading & shading depth. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:05, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <span style="">03:45, 11/30/2014

can you blur and maybe thicken the shading everywhere not on the head? 03:49, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? I kinda can't see them. This is really cute, though.

Re-uploaded - Thank you! All change have been added, although having some trouble with the stripes. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is making her looks pretty green in those areas. Try tinting it a dark red? <span style="">00:34, 12/2/2014

The only place she "looks green" is probably the paws. Everywhere else looks fine to me, imho. Again, as I've said before, tinting shading is not mandatory, Ruefrost, so please do not think you're under any obligation to do so- you can do whatever you're comfortable with doing.

Clawface (Ki) ~ For Approval
Kit storm! =) I feel like I'm the only one who really liked Clawface..now I'm not sure if he had any scars that were confirmed when he had been a kit. I can go through YS again later, but you all could make it easier on me if you just say he had one over here or there. Now 1 thing I must be clear on: I cannot define the earpink. I'm matching other images and that's the color they were when I picked, and that's the color they are now. Thank you. Comment away~ 14:04, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Why would he have scars as a kit?? He doesn't have them as an apprentice, how would a kit get scars? Anything big enough for that would probably be mentioned XD Define the shading a tad? 14:08, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. XD well I've seen kits in real life that have scars because of cuts on things left around, and other cruel humans things..it's a sad thing when you see kits with scars. So I assume anything can happen, too, in the series lol. Especially when your name is Clawface. :3 14:32, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Mm. It's pretty sad indeed. Define the shading some more on the tail and legs? 15:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:15, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

You're gonna have to do something with that ear pink, Darkfrost. I can't see it at all, and it looks like he doesn't have any. Try picking from the lighter spots, and I'd go so far as to say you can even use the ear pink color from the alt warrior. I honestly can't even tell he's got ear pink. These blanks are terribly small and sometimes you have to tweak colors to get them to show up.

Re-uploaded. Before, I had picked from the rogue. This time, I picked from the warrior, which seemed to have lighter earpink. Let me know if you can see it or not. I know, these blanks are so freaking small it's hard to make anything appear, like shading and earpink. *.* 18:47, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. It's ok if the earpink doesn't match completely in cases like this so we can //see// it, I would think. <span style="">00:48, 11/30/2014

Re-uploaded. Altered the color so you could see it. It's not too far off, only a shade or two. 13:04, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the face a bit? I know it's shaded, just don't know where the light falls. <span style="">00:32, 12/2/2014

Re-uploaded. Added a highlight on the face, too, to help clarify a bit. Also messed around with the facial shading. 13:45, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the main part of the body? It looks a bit... eh, I don't like saying blotchy anymore since it kinda seems rude unless it's obvious as hell, but... it just seems a bit rough? Perhaps that's a better word... I dunno.

Lol I see what you're talking about. Eh it's smudged shading so idk. I guess I could screw around with it a bit later. Maybe I'll even attempt David's amazing style. 12:58, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading. Much happier with it, it is also no longer rough/blotchy. 19:08, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Splash (KP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
He does not get a collar since he was born a loner. And I think this is cute 18:57, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define facial shading? He's adorable <3 <span style="">04:34, 11/30/2014

Reups defining face shading on the black fur is an absolute nightmare. And thank you! 11:49, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry to make you do this~Darken/define the shading more on the black only, because I can't see it on the black. He's so cute! ^.^ 14:58, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Reups if I define it anymore the lineart'll be invisible 19:05, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Super minor thing, but is that a white tail tip? I'm sorry, you know me and my eyes. x.x If you could brighten that tip up juuuust a bit? I can tell everything else is white but that- I'll CBA this afterwards since I think this matches pretty well.

Reups thanks =p 15:36, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Rose (Ki) ~ For Approval
Weather reporter: There is a 99% chance of kits on the approval page! Anyways, I made a siamese kit. 20:02, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the collar by like one pixel? the collar would be pretty big on a kit <span style="">03:44, 11/30/2014

Re-uploaded Did I make the collar too big? Anyways, I also defined the collar tag shading and got rid of waste I saw. 18:48, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

do you think you could recede the brown on the legs a little? it makes it look like her chest has brown on it. 03:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Boom Did I recede it too much? 00:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

No, that's good. Maybe add another layer of shading on the right side of her at a lower opacity so we have some depth? <span style="">00:31, 12/2/2014

Blur/smudge the brown on the legs a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Kits 00:48, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
So beebs said the nonpregnant blanks can be considered approved. This counts as a redone queen, so I believe I'm allowed to keep this and Jake, am I not? flooof 00:03, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

reups i found what is either waste orrrr a smudge on my screen that looks like waste. 00:26, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading some more, and define the shading on the back leg farthest from us. I love this, and her tail XD 12:51, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Flooooooof 13:12, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading on her rump and tail?

but of course 21:04, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Perfect! There is nothing I would do to change this! Its brilliant <3 NikiandCats (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014

Plz sign ur posts with four "~"s, by the way, can you lighten up the shading just a teeeeeeeeennnyyy bit? Burntclaw (talk) 00:28, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, tbh. It looks brilliant like this. <span style="">00:30, 12/2/2014

Can you define the stripes on the main part of the body? Like the belly and upper back? I'm having some trouble seeing them. Also, are her stripes (especially the tail stripes) smudged on this? Because on her other images, they aren't, and the color seems fairly lighter when looking at this one.... it kinda reminds me of the color of her older images in the file history. I also think she has four tail rings, while on this, I can only see three, unless there's a stripe at the top that I can't see? I'm so sorry; it sounds like I'm nagging and talking bad on your image. ;.; It's really good and I like it and I want to make sure it matches because she deserves it for raising those kits.

Went ahead and redid it, since it wasn't co-operating. It was the right color, just the highlights throwing it off. And you didn't sound like you were nagging or anythin', you were simply giving what I like to call "Constructive criticism.". And you're right, she does deserve some justice. 00:00, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Petal (Ro) (Q) - CBA
I had so much fun with this pattern. ^^ Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:17, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading overall? Lol, I wanted her again. The Fox Girl (talk) 03:06, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Shading's fine tbh. <span style="">03:43, 11/30/2014

I'd have to say lighten the shading a tad on the > front leg and on the tail only because I can't see the pattern through it. Could be my eyes though, so if you think it's fine ignore me. This is gorgeous <3 12:48, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Try to match the placement of the stripes on the rogue and kit a bit better and lighten them and blur them. Also try to match the coloring of the shading and try to blur it in that same way. I'd really prefer that if I don't get to do this image they match exactly. >.> <span style="">13:48 Tue Dec 2 2014

Sorry, that was rude. You wouldn't have known I wanted it you weren't in the chat. But may I please have this image? I did the other two and I'd really like to finish the full set as I'm rather proud of her rogue and kit still. <span style="">14:00 Tue Dec 2 2014

Nobody take this the wrong way, I'd just like to say that Jayie shouldn't feel pressured into giving over the image. If Jayie wants to keep the image, you can just send her the file, Breezey, to make it match more precisely. 15:23, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Also, tbh, neither the kit nor the rogue are really showing the pattern on (their) right side, like this one is. The pattern doesn't have to be symmetrical, and besides, I think this matches beautifully. 15:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I didn't realize you wanted this image. But I've also wanted it for quite a while, and I think I can get it to match. I'd like to keep it, if that's alright. I'll reupload soon, I'm having laptop issues. I'm really sorry about the image, but I really enjoyed working on it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:27, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Oh boy so have I, since the nonpreg queens were up for approval. But fine. My comments remain the same the stripes need to be lighter and smudged like the others. As does the shading. <span style="">3:44 Wed Dec 3 2014

Sorry, again. I'll hopefully be able to reupload tomorrow, although maybe my roommate will let me borrow her laptop so I can do it tonight. Just out of curiosity, could you send me the file by any chance, so I could get the colors right? If not, that's fine. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:14, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna pop in here and say that Breezey more than likely doesn't have the file. The computer 99% of her files are on isn't in her possession and has probably been crashed a few dozen times. She's told us this a few times, but I don't think you were around to know that- which isn't a bad thing in the least. Hate to say it, Jayie, but you're probably on your own this time. x.x

That's fine. :) I'm cool without the file. I don't think I ever heard that she lost her files, but if I did,sorry for forgetting, and thanks anyway. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:27, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:28, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

As gorgeous as what she was named for. CBA? 21:47, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Clovertail (Alt Q 2) ~ For Approval
i completely butchered this one im so sorry 00:55, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Just lighten up the chest shading a tick, it's a bit grey. And you did not butcher her you made her purrtty 01:32, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Shading's fine. There's enough white on her that you can tell the chest is actually white under the shading. <span style="">04:32, 11/30/2014

I agree with Sorrel, but not because I think it's gray. I think it's a bit too dark there.

The body shading seems to clash with the pelt color. Maybe lighten it a shade? 12:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 13:14, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back? <span style="">22:21 Mon Dec 1

re-up 00:04, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the facial shading just a tad..not too much though because it's far from the light and should be darker, but a little because like the body before, it is clashing a bit. She's beautiful Beebs~you've done a wonderful job. =) 13:51, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 23:41, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hind paw we can see all of? <span style="">23:50, 12/2/2014

re-up 19:46, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

re-up waste so 01:58, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

One-eye (Alt Q) - For Approval
um so I tired a different light source. changes <span style="">01:15, 11/30/2014

Lighten the shading, please. I know the whole artist's choice thing is around, but it's a bit too dark and clashes with the base.

reups holy smokes i made it really dark oops. anyway that's better <span style="">21:40, 11/30/2014

CBA? 23:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading could be smoothed out a little more, except for on the tail and back legs.

reup <span style="">20:11, 12/3/2014

Clovertail (Alt Q) ~ CBA
yuck. 01:19, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a bit? Nice job, Sorrel~ <span style="">04:33, 11/30/2014

Reups 11:15, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

define the belly shading. 03:47, December 1, 2014 (UTC) Darken the stomach? NikiandCats (talk) 22:17, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

The stomach shading is fine, but it probably could be defined. Also, are the stripes supposed to just look like they're cutting off on the tail and places of the like? ....or is that just my eyes playing tricks on me?

Define the shading on the front legs a tad? And just gonna confirm that Jayce's eyes are in fact not playing tricks on them. 22:32, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I know, I was gonna fix that tail. For some reason I decided to cut them off, I was tired and couldn't really be bothered. I'll fix that up on the next upload. And no, Niki, I think that the stomach shading's darkness is fine. I'll define it, however. 22:39, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 22:45, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Comments? 23:59, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Would a CBA, perhaps, suffice? 01:41, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt Q) - CBA
Yooo redone blanks

Blur/smudge the shading on the back by the ear. Also, define the shading on the front legs, and maybe add some beneath the head? The head would probably cast shadow, but if I'm being silly, ignore me. 10:07, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is icky so I'll probably redo it again.

Blur the shading a bit more? Especially on the forehead. Burntclaw (talk) 00:20, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I said I'd redo it so I have this now and I stole David's source. I like this one a biiiiit more- I'm just having tail shading issues.

Define the shading on the belly and front legs? <span style="">23:49, 12/2/2014

Re-uploaded.

Can you define the transition of the shading a bit more please? It looks rather hard-edged right now and I can't see the transition well. <span style="">0:53 Thu Dec 4

Uh, what? I have no idea what you mean, or where I'm supposed to do it? Because I think the stomach area is fine, but could you elaborate? I've had pretty hard-edged shading before, so I'm totally lost.

Like, I have a hard time seeing the "gradient" from dark to light, mostly on the stomach. I know you may think its fine, and you may leave it as-is if you wish. However, I'm pretty much asking for you to define the shading depth, but not where the darkest part of the shading is. I'm sorry I am horrible at explaining things you don't have to listen to me anymore. :S <span style="">3:57 Thu Dec 4

Nah, it's cool. I'll take a look and see what I can do. I was just so confused, thanks for explaining.

Re-uploaded. idk I did stuff.

You did exactly what I asked. And You get a CBA because this is so amazing. <span style="">21:34 Thu Dec 4

Daisy (Alt Q. 3) ~ CBA
ay papi 04:50, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Should she have a scar on her muzzle? I'm not too sure though... — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded. yes she should. 23:42, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad on the back leg farthest from us. how do you shade? I must know what you use & do because I adore it. 14:51, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the shading is fine, but that's just me. <span style="">22:20 Mon Dec 1

all the shading is about the same opacity, so I will have to say it's ok here. smudging man, tons of smudging thats how 00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the shading a little bit on the upper part of the leg closest to us? It's a bit too sharp compared to the rest of the shading <span style="">00:24, 12/2/2014

re-uploaded. I thought I already did but apparently not whoops 01:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">0:49 Thu Dec 4

Nightstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
yo I actually kinda like how this turned out 16:34, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs and face. 03:46, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you brighten up more. I cant really see.. NikiandCats (talk) 22:16, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

The base pelt matches his other images, so it's fine. Also define the neck shading- I can't see it.

Re-uploaded I just defined the shading altogether. 22:38, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, friend? <span style="">23:47, 12/2/2014

Ferncloud (Alt Q 2) ~ For Approval
The shading is icky, so may I please have a redline? 20:50, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:20, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the facial shading and tail shading a bit? <span style="">22:05, 11/30/2014

Re-Uploaded 23:20, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changed shading into smudged shading. =) 23:39, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Upped 23:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Have the tail shading curve more with the shape of the tail. I like this a lot. =) 14:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the closest front and back legs, too, and add a few more flecks. Nicely done, Tiger, I don't think you need a redline for the shading ^_^  16:24, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I forgot to ask you to blur/smudge the belly shading a little. <span style="">21:33, 12/1/2014

Would you like the file to her queen, Tiger? 22:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks. ^-^ 00:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I think this may need a bit more flecks on the right side of the face? Either that or define them, because I can kind of see them, but Im not sure. <span style="">00:11, 12/2/2014

Lighten up the shading on the left front paw. Burntclaw (talk) 00:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:51, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Make the shading curve with the tail. <span style="">23:46, 12/2/2014

Re-upped 03:08, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Plz lighten up the shading on both front paws- they look like darker paws instead of shading. Burntclaw (talk) 11:38, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Please lighten up the shading a tad on the hind leg farthest from us, I honestly cannot see the stripes through it. 13:06, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading lot more, it looks hard edged. Especially on the tail. Burntclaw (talk) 10:04, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Alt Q.) ~ For Approval
I luv Goldenflower :3 16:05, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 19:17, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Just as a heads-up, please don't align your images. =P I've fixed it for now, but keep that in mind for future images.

I recommend also tinting the shading a dark red. It might help a bit. Nicely done~ <span style="">22:24, 12/1/2014

Re-ups 19:46, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the back most visible paw. ^^ 03:10, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Did you take Ferk's suggestion on tinting your shading? Because it appears the stripes are merging with the shading in several places. 13:09, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

The StarClan image doesn't look tinted, and if she didn't tint it already, she might not want to do so. Honestly, it doesn't fade into the shading anymore than the other images do.

Define the shadin on the tail. Burntclaw (talk) 10:06, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Ashheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried Jayie's shading. All colors from the warrior image, which I'm the OA of. Comments? 21:57, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the chest? <span style="">22:22, 12/1/2014

Reuploaded. 22:33, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source and blur the shading a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the light source just fine, though I'll change it if others agree. As for the blurring, I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur or smudge her shading. 00:53, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading above the hind leg could be defined more <span style="">05:32, 12/2/2014

Reuploaded. Changes |here. I'll fix the waste next. 21:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on this <-- front paw. 03:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:35, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I honestly cannot tell where the light is coming from on this source. The head tells me it's coming from straight above, the chest tell me it's coming from the left, and the legs and side tell me it's coming from the right. 13:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to change the shading again unless it's either absolutely necessary or involves dulling the highlights. 13:33, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Flowerstar (Ki) ~ CBA
I don't even know where all these kits came from. Someone please tell me, literally. <span style="">22:19 Mon Dec 1

they came from their mums Define the light on the tail? <span style="">22:22, 12/1/2014

nah they came from hell define the head shading a tad?? 22:23, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, basically, in a nutshell... all cats who have a confirmed littermate or parent qualify for the kit ranking. Especially if they have a confirmed mother, since they gave birth to the cat, and we give queen rankings for that. tldr, I started a PC discussion and it actually went over really well for once and now we apparently have tons of kits because I vastly underestimated the amount of characters with siblings and parents in this series. Also can you define the light on --> back paw if there is any?

Re-uploaded. Okay, thank you muchly. Lol Beebly... the blanks came from hell, not the kits. The only kit from hell is Clear Sky. <span style="">22:30 Mon Dec 1

Could you define the light on the two front legs? I dunno, there are so many kits I'm started to agree with Beebs..Lol 14:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:36 Tue Dec 2

CBA? 23:55, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Ki) - For Approval
02:22, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

SHe's cuuuuuute. Define the shading a bit on the legs?

Smudge the colors together more to match the other images. Burntclaw (talk) 04:52, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

She's adorable, Ducky! =) Define the tail shading some more. 14:00, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think the shading could be defined overall. <span style="">23:44, 12/2/2014

Gorsestar (K) ~ For Approval
I couldn't get ahold of any of his files, but i tried :P. He probably doesn't match 110%,  but i colorpicked from his other images as best as i could. ^^'. As usual, smudged shading; so please don't ask me to blur it. His hair spikes are so adorable~  04:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the leg to our left and the tail. Also maybe add some shading in the esr to our left the face looks flat over there. Nicely done, Breeze. <span style="">05:34, 12/2/2014

Define your earpink a bit, too. Welcome to hell: where you must try to define an earpink that blends in perfectly with its pelt colors! XD I likey this =) 13:58, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Sunstar (Ki) - For Approval
tiny child sunstar <span style="">23:39, 12/2/2014

He's adorable! Define the shading on the neck? I can't see it. Burntclaw (talk) 00:20, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

reup boop <span style="">00:39, 12/3/2014

Define the the shading on the front <- leg. I like this a lot. 20:51, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

reup I like it a lot too lmao <span style="">21:14, 12/3/2014

Define the ear pink. Burntclaw (talk) 13:08, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

One Eye (Ki) ~ For Approval
ok 03:48, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'd say define the shading on the face? the ruffles make it hard to see >< 03:59, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 04:09, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. I can hardly see it. Burntclaw (talk) 09:59, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 11:19, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Dove's Wing (Ki) ~ For Approval
I somehow managed to upload the wrong version twice, I am a failure <span style="">04:45, 12/3/2014

Lighten up the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 06:49, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I think in this case, it would only need to be lightened a small amount. It looks good on the legs and tail, but I think the main body shading could be lightened a bit.

Re-uploaded <span style="">01:31, 12/4/2014

Smudge the shading a bit more? It looks a bit hard edged. Burntclaw (talk) 09:58, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Brightspirit (kit) ~ For Approval
Poor Emmy :( :'( Stupid tornado. Burntclaw (talk) 08:19, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are supposed to break apart, so to say, and form a bit of a triangle-like shape around her chest area. There should be the accidental triangle shape, two more lines, and then another connected stripe at the bottom. I know it's a lot for a kit image, but I hadn't known about her qualifying for it when I made this style. The stripes are smudged kinda like a lot of the users here smudge their shading too, if that helps. ^^ Also try and give the shading a bit more of a shape. I'm not sure if it's my computer, but it looks like a bit of block of shading on her chest. Could very well be my eyes, though. Damnit I wanted this I adore her. ;.;

Re-ups El tornado es muy estupido :<<<<<<<< Anyway, re-did the stripes. Burntclaw (talk) 08:56, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit and connect those top two neck-area stripes so the top three form a triangleish-like shape. I swear that was not intentional when I made the StarClan image- it just happened. lmao yes the tornado was quite stupid. I dunno what it was doing on the ground anyways- they need to stay away.

Re-ups Brainless tornadoes Whew, this is hard :'D Burntclaw (talk) 09:11, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups lightened the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 09:05, December 4, 2014 (UTC)