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Stoneclaw (W) ~ For Approval
Trying this with GIMP. -- 23:09, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink?Broken_Foot

Define the shading on the tail 23:11, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Base color doesn't seem to match other images

Smooth out the blotchy parts of the shading on the back and neck, and define the shading on the paws and the haunch. 23:15, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Why are the legs farthest from us lighter than the rest of the body? 23:31, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I colorpicked from the StarClan image and checked again and it is the right base color. And in my reupload I couldn't seem to get rid of the waste so can somebody who knows GIMP tell me how? -- 23:38, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Not to state the obvious, but there's lots of waste around the whole thingBroken_Foot

Well for GIMP, go to your lineart layer, fill the outside of the lineart in red, and then use the color select tool to select the red. Then, erase the red, then go to your shading layer and erase the waste there (make your brush super big, for it to get it all). It works on any layer, actually. Also, define the light. This really does look darker than the star, unless you picked from an area that was shaded on it.

There's leaking shading along the back and a bit on the hind leg closest to us. Also, define the shading on the tail, and the light on the front legs. 23:52, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little 00:23, 4/01/2017

Reups --  00:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's a lot of gaps in the earpink--can you fix that? 00:52 4/1/17 (UTC)

Reups --  01:29, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur the lighting (if the lighter parts on the <-- side are lighting, I'm tired) and earpink and possibly match the eye color a bit better? 01:50, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink some more and define the shading and shading depth some more. ~Patch   feather~   13:27, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  15:47, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading around the head and hind legs a little and smooth it out. ~Patch   feather~   16:46, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  17:05, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back paws and near the flank and define the light on the front legs. ~Patch   feather~   18:13, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

So this are the main colors I used for the StarClan image; the base color is 757575, then for the shading mainly 454545, for earpink A59090. 18:24, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the colors! c: --  20:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

smooth the lighting more 22:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

The eye colour is still quite different. 23:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:28, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Make the lineart black. 03:34, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reups --  15:22, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there's still color leaking onto the lineart 17:51, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I tried..but I don't know how to fix that. --  18:24, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try just replacing the lineart layer; some parts look dark gray. Overlapping the lineart layer should fix any problems like that. Also, smooth the paler parts, because this image shouldn't have any, and it kinda looks like it does. Besides that, define the light on both front legs and round out the shading on the rump.

Reups I tried to replace the lineart but that one turned dark gray too. I know it's because of the shading but I don't know how to stop the shading from coloring the lineart. ._. --  18:39, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

The layer with your lineart should be the topmost layer, or second topmost depending on how you do your eyes and stuff. Basically, the lineart should be above the base pelt, shading, highlights, ect.

Reups I tried to erase some of the color on the lineart. --  18:47, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit 20:49, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  21:54, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smooth it out.

Reups Now I have a feeling it's too dark :c --  01:58, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Fox, you need to really smooth out the shading everywhere.Broken_Foot

Shading's also leaking away from the lineart a little bit on the foreleg closest to us and on his underbelly (unless the underbelly was intentional?). 20:50, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading depth. 02:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

where's his pupil? 19:02, 4/06/2017

Still working?

His pupil is on the left side of his eye. --  23:06, April 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * No, there needs to be a pupil visible in the eye. Look at some other warrior images for reference. The eye is just the blank model for the warrior image. 15:22, 4/08/2017

Eye style is artist's choice. I can see it and I know it's there. It's fine, and you're being picky. I've even made warrior images with eyes like this in the past.

Reups --  20:04, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading overall, I really can hardly make it out. 23:51, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:59, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 00:01, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit imo

Reups --  00:17, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's gray leaking all over the lineart, please make sure it's black. I also think you could define shading depth, and maybe lighten the shading on the legs, it looks like his legs are darker than the rest of his body 00:36, April 10, 2017 (UTC)


 * Make sure what's black; the shading? Shading tint is artist's choice. Also no to the lightening the shading on the legs, get rid of some of the shading on the legs, to define the light source. Define the shading everywhere else as well. 02:01, 4/10/2017


 * I am sure Snow meant making the lineart black since there is some gray leaking over it. 02:18, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, that was definitely a comment about the lineart, Winter. Also, I'm going to disagree with your comment about lightening the shading. Even if Foxey gets rid of some of the shading, it's still going to be a tad bit darker, so lightening the shading wouldn't hurt in the least.

Reups --  23:00, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. 13:47, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:13, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

The shading along the back appears to be leaking away from the lineart. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:02, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's still a little gray leaking onto the lineart, particularly on the rump and base of the tail, and could you smooth out the tail shading a bit, there are some lighter hard edged pixels towards the top of it 18:30, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:43, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth overall, an define the shading on the face some.

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
Shading is annoying. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed out and define the dark splotch on her ear?Broken_Foot

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 17:52, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth shading some more and define it on the legs? 19:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:41, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little more, define the light on the legs and tail. 20:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:42, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little. Also, I think the belly shading should extend further ---> way, towards where the haunch overlaps the underbelly. 22:24, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a bit? 23:40, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you move the splotch more on the ear and define it? It kind of blends in with the shading on the side of the head 01:10, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:54, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on both front legs and the back one farthest from us, and smooth out the shading a bit? 17:41, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's a little piece on the belly near the hips where the shading is missing. 22:47, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the belly and a little way above the base of the tail 00:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit dark.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:10, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the <-- front leg near the lineart. 14:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The waste is still there :/ and I think shading could be lightened and smoothed some more  15:06, April 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * The shading darkness is fine, Snow. But I do agree on the smoothing of it 02:05, 4/10/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Not to be rude, but I cannot tell the difference between each of your uploads. I noticed only little to no change to your image. Excuse me if I come off rude, but I really can't tell the differenceBroken_Foot

Smooth the shading.

Just thought I'd point out that the waste is still there- right below the belly, and a little at the top of the image above the tail 23:59, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's a reddish marking on the lower part of the belly that I don't think is supposed to be there. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:10, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:46, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste around the whole image 22:34, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I'm pretty sure all the waste is gone now. ErmineGlow (talk) 12:35, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still waste around the muzzle and tailtip 13:36, 4/14/2017

I think there's still waste around the <-- paw closest to us too.

Sun Shadow (D) - CBA
Makes me want to sing Fireflies by Owl city. ..

I am such a damn idiot. . ..

The eye colour looks more gray than amber. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:49, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

I colorpicked from the loner, though it does kind of look gray. Return later.

Smooth the shading some

I question if the loner's eyes were every changed... for eye color, it's probably better that you pick from the ancient cat image; you'll get a better range of colors that way.

re-up Eye depth is hard on the deputy.

Define the light on the back leg farthest from us? 02:59, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Define the light on the tail?

re-up Size 10 and size 5 brushes are my friend.

CBA? Such a good image for a wonderful cat.

Icewing (A) - For Approval
White cats are fun to make! 22:54, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

I think you saved it wrong again. The image is too small. 22:56, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out shading? Also mind defining eye depth too?

Reuploaded I tried making it bigger using Paint.NET since GIMP just made it even smaller. :P 00:10, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

No matter how big you make it the lineart is gonna be blurred. 00:11, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the furthest hind leg? And it looks like there are specks of shading missing on the shoulder and flank. 00:15, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still can't belive I got it to be bigger! :D Now I feel like the lineart is too thick. Yeah, I fix it later. 00:34, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

I have an idea so you dont have to go through much trouble. Maybe save the lineart correctly, overlap it onto this drawing, erase the original lineart, then fill in anything that's left blank. It might not work but idk 01:39, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aah, much better. Sorry, Danny, I already finished when you said that. 01:58, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems blotchy. Maybe smoothen it out or something else :) 02:19, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Lineart looks kinda blurred. Fix that? (It's probably my eyes . . . just saying)

is the image cut off in places or is that just me 02:53, 4/13/2017

Haha no I can see it too, and the lineart is still too thick in some places 02:54, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit. 04:35, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

I suggest pasting the linear art over it. If you need the full size, it's here: http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Apprentice.long.png

Reuploaded Thanks guys! Hopefully this is better! :) 23:23, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the light on the --> side of the tail some

Reuploaded 23:54, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

The line art is still too thick in some areas, and cut off I think. Also, the shading still seems blotchy/streaky, and it could be defined for depth. :) 23:56, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) Where exactly is the lineart thick or cut off? 00:14, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Its cut off at the tail, and at the leg.

Where on the tail and what leg? 00:30, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Tip of the tail and on the hind leg closest to us.

Reuploaded Is this good? 00:47, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

You haven't fixed the hind leg, and now i just noticed the --> paw. Tail tip doesn't look right, either.

Reuploaded I fixed the tail tip, I can't find where it's cut off on the paw and leg. (Sorry for being frustrating) 01:06, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, chest, and face, and smooth out the shading overall? I mean, it's all right to have a lot of shading, but it's making the image look almost as if it's gray-and-white, at least on my screen. 01:14, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

All around the lineart is blurred, and too thick in some areas (all of the paws, <-- ear, etc.) I think the only way to fix it would be to do what Fox said, paste the lineart over your image

This appears to only be on one layer again, and thats why the lineart is blurred along with the shading. 13:34, 4/14/2017

If you're using MS paint, because this image looks a lot like it was made using that program, I recommend GIMP 20:36, 4/14/2017

Broken, I think Shy already uses GIMP.

Swankit (Star) - CBA
First tabby & first StarClan kit. I was so anxious to get Running Fox approved so I could reserve this :P 02:27, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit? Nicely done, Danny, I'm quite impressed with this. o.o

reups Thank you! I'm pretty happy about how this turned out. 02:35, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

This is very, very, very amazing. Great job on this! Define the shading depth a tad? Also, I know how you feel.Broken_Foot

reups Also darkened the stripes a tad. They were looking more dark gray to me. 02:45, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Mind smudging the stripes a tiny bit? 00:41, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

reups 01:17, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? This is extremely adorable.

Harespring (L) - CBA
you go Harespring! 03:31, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the smudges. They're a bit softer on his other images (also just as an fyi, the warrior is the first in this set, if you're unsure of colors and pattern).

Smooth out the shading a bit? (I love him <3) Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:07, April 13, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Re-uploaded. 13:21, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little on the chest, and on ---> shoulder. 00:36, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Also lightened the shading in some areas. 02:16, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on haunch, ---> legs, lower chest area, and a few minor spots. Define the shading on the < haunch c: 02:28, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, if Patch is using the source I believe they are, <-- haunch isn't supposed to have a lot of shading... I think. Not sure if it's this source or another one, but one of them has very little shading on that area of the haunch. I'm sorry, I'm sleepy and confusing my sources again.

'''Re-uploaded. '''I didn't really like the way the shading was turning out so I decided to just redo it. 13:04, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Good riddance imo @ Onestar CBA? 15:54, 4/14/2017

Lightningtail (Star) - CBA
This is not an image I wanted to ever post. I am not okay with this at all and I kinda want to curl up into a ball and pretend it didn't happen.

This is nice, define the shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:06, April 13, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Define earpink in <-- ear.

Re-uploaded. Can't really define the ear pink, persay, but I did change the color to better match the other images.

Poor baboo ;-; CBA? 15:54, 4/14/2017

Deerpaw (TC) (A) ~ CBA


Brighten up the white flecks 13:10, 4/13/2017

Reuploaded

I think they could be brightened up a bit more, and could you smooth out the shading?

Reuploaded In any case, most of the flecks are under shading, so they're bound to look a bit darker.

This is just a suggestion, but you could give the white flecks a little more variation.

Reuploaded

CBA? 15:55, 4/14/2017

Morningstar (L) - CBA
15:18, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Some of the shading from the --> front leg is leaking onto the <-- side of the haunch

Reupload 00:25, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Eaglekit (TC) (Ki) - CBA
Comments? 17:23, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth?

Reuploaded. 21:30, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit 23:39, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:43, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Probably gonna get shot for this, but I adore this little cutie, so I want to CBA this. Man, Bluestar, your art has improved so much over the years you've been here. =O

Max (Ro) (KP) ~ CBA
My little winged masked marauder >:3c 23:16, 4/13/2017

Dang, I had my eye on him for some time now. Smooth out the shading a little bit?Broken_Foot

I've had my eye on him too. Idk if it's me, but are the eyes a bit purplish? Also, define the shading depth. 23:37, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded They're a blue-gray 02:39, 4/14/2017

Could you enlarge the ear pink just a tiny bit? The shading + the white makes it difficult to see, even with max brightness on my desktop.

Reuploaded Lightened the shading on the earpink a tiny bit. As per discussion on Skype, it's behind ear fur :P <span style="">13:58, 4/14/2017

I can see it. CBA?

Honeyfur (W) - CBA
I'm sorry I haven't been active at all this week, but I was staying off of here as to not spoil myself for the new books (I was only able to get them a few hours ago and just finished reading). Anyway, I'll probably fix this up a little later. 00:33, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on paws farthest from us?

Re-uploaded. I tried, but those paws are pretty small. 01:08, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink?

Re-uploaded. I added earpink in an area where it had been sort of smudged away, so I hope that helped it. I'd rather not change the color, though, because it was directly colorpicked off the kit. 16:10, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

A minor-ish thing, but the stripes on the upper patch on the back (triangle-ish one) seem more dense and closer together. Here, they appear to have more space between them

Re-uploaded. 17:38, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Lovely^^ CBA?

Silverflame (W) ~ For Approval
First try at photoshop! it's such a complex program, but the brushes are amazing.

Smooth the flank shading and define the tail shading 03:29, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

The gray spots look really sharp/weird (idk how to describe it). Fix it?

Photoshop is beautiful. Remove the eyelashes, dear. =P

Smooth out the orange and there appears to be waste under the tail? Unless I'm unbelievably blind Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded i'll remove the waste on the next upload. (y do i forget abt the eyelashes)

Define the earpink I can't see it at all <span style="">04:13, 4/14/2017

Re-uploaded I forgot to add it

Gray spots still don't look right.

Well how do i know what to fix if you just say "it doesn't look right"? can you please specify.

They're very blocky and hard-edged. Maybe try smudging them more. 05:12, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded this is as far as I'm willing to smudge it bc the other images have visible lines on them.

maybe expand the shading on the back leg / whatever area that is just a little? 16:55, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the tail shading just a smidge? Unless that's the source, then sorry <span style="User:Broken_Foot/Time">18:54, 4/14/2017

Apple Blossom (ES) - For Approval
what went wrong  05:47, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

You want the file for the kit when I get home from work? The base should be fairly lighter, I believe. Also, the stripes are more of a classic style, and they're smudged.


 * yes pls senpai 06:32, April 14, 2017 (UTC)


 * Define the shading depth on the tummy? Amazing as always, Scar!



Silver Stripe (ES) - For Approval
All layers from the kit. How I've been waiting to be able to post this. <span style="">15:07 Fri Apr 14

The stripes on the kit image actually look a little more blurred/smudged than they do here. Also is the top half of the cat supposed to have faint stripes like that? <span style="">15:59, 4/14/2017

The stripes were done the exact same way as before, it just looks sharper because the blank was bigger so a slightly larger brush was used. And the lighter stripes are from a highlight. That's also on the kit, just not as visible with the light source on it. <span style="">16:25 Fri Apr 14

Shivering Rose(MCA) ~ For Approval
I'll smooth out the shading in the next upload, and yes, the nose is filled in, just with a very dark red Twisted Slice Of The Crow's Talon  Broken_Foot

The spots on the head seem a little more smudged out on the kit.

dull down the highlights a bit. (or make the base darker, whichever) 17:14, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink. The kit is a darkish red color <span style="">17:20, 4/14/2017

Brighten the white patch on the chest - I know it's under shading, but it seems really gray.

Re-uploaded! Only got to the first two comments, so I'm off to work<font face="Segoe Print">  —Broken    <font face="Segoe Print">   _Foot   <font face="Segoe Print">  Ra Ra Rasputin   Broken_Foot

The markings on the head should be smaller, they're too smudged out. I used a 1px brush and smudged them gently around, not just straight up and down :P <span style="">17:26, 4/14/2017

Re-uploaded! This is hard to match an image oh my<font face="Segoe Print">  —Broken    <font face="Segoe Print">   _Foot   <font face="Segoe Print">  Ra Ra Rasputin   Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded! Tweaked some things and cleaned up waste

Sol (L) ~ For Approval
idk :^/ 18:21, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Hoot (L) ~ For Approval
Hoothoot 20:22, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink in --> ear?