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Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
OK, I shouldnt be doing black cats on this laptop because the colors are all screwed up and I have to squint to see the shading. But here. 20:01, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her maybe and dull down the Ear Pink. She looks grey on my screen. (correct me if I am wrong about the earpink)  20:14, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a blacked out nose? 03:09 Tue Feb 10

Actually, I think I asked Breezey about this once, and black cats don't need to have black noses. I think they can have a darker reddish nose, or something along those lines.

Mind darkening him a tad? He seems pretty light. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:45, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Brambleshade already said that, Burntclaw^^ Also, may you define the tail shading? 15:55, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Dew Nose 19:46, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over :P 22:13, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Updated 23:12, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice job! 23:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna bring attention to the fact that it's got the wrong file name; could an admin fix that for Bramble? 00:07, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe I could fix it. 00:09, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There we go. I really like her :3 00:11, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mind lightening up the ear pink a little? Gorgeous, Bramble :$ ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I think she is one fine kitty <3 Any better? 00:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the legs, and define the light on the legs. 12:57 Wed Feb 11

Updated I wonder if this has any difference... 19:44, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten ear pink a bit-- 19:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. 21:22, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the lighter parts of the image- I'm having issues really seeing the shading too, but I think it's a good darkness, so tweaking your highlights and/or lighter areas (if you don't use highlights, which aren't mandatory) might help with this.

Updated Huh.. I wonder if anyone else see's the difference in this magnificent cat <3 21:06, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt L 5) ~ For Approval
I tried to add some texture, but it failed miserably so I just got rid of that. I've never done a leader before; comments? There's some waste under her hind-quarter, which I will remove on my next upload. 21:43, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking. (i think bluestar is cursed) 21:48 Wed Feb 11

Define the earpink a bit. Splendid job, Sorrel. =) 23:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on her legs. Also, smooth it out in a lot of places, like the legs and the tail. 09:11, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

I see a couple of errors besides the waste on the lower rump: There is a grey pixel on her right eye, there is waste on the nicked ear, and waste on her whiskers and the neck. 19:52, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 22:33, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the earpink a bit? 03:53, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it. 09:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I think it's alright. 15:07, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail. 03:35, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the scar just a tad? I can barely see it. It may just be my monitor, so feel free to disregard this if you think its alright.-- 21:13, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups sure 00:59, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad more. 16:24, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 23:52, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on <== leg and smooth out the shading on the tail a little bit more. 14:17, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine, imho, and I'd rather not, because I've got leg shading on several layers. 22:24, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think adding a very dull highlight will help there. *shrugs* 13:22, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 18:38, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Coal (NP) (Ro) - CBA
okay. 07:01, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

The other Coal isn't archived... ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:32, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I just archived it because it's early in the morning, I just got off work, and this time it's my fault since I neglected to archive a withdrawn image like I usually do. I'm not feeling well and starting an argument over something as minor as this is just...really dumb. Same with all the other ones that have happened. I'm not gonna start crap over that anymore- it's not worth it and it's counterproductive. My apologies, Breeze.

Define the shading on the back legs please. 19:49, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Its fine, Jayce. Its partly my fault for not paying attention, so theres no need to apologize. =) 22:26, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink and scar a bit? 03:55, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:05, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the tail and face 13:10, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  18:06, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Eagle Feather (Ki) - For Approval
Yes, the shading is black. I don't feel like tinting it since it's not mandatory and it doesn't look green.

Define the shading, and maybe smooth it out a little. 15:51 Fri Feb 13

Re-uploaded.

If you zoom into the bottom of the picture, you can see waste at the front foot. 19:47, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope I got it... that's odd, though...there's never waste on my images with how I have my layers...

Yeah, that is strange, but you got it off. 20:01, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Mind defining the shading on the ---> front leg? I can barely see any. This looks great =).-- 22:31, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I doesn't need defining, but it could use a little blur. 00:57, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think it needs defining, as it looks like there is only a smidge of shading on the leg. The paw shading could use a blur, but the leg shading needs to be defined. 13:56, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Great Spirits, make up my mind already you nerds. I cannot feel my hands because of how cold it is.

The back leg tells me the light source is coming from <== whereas the rest tells me it's coming from the other way around, could you fix that? 14:16, February 19, 2015 (UTC

Re-uploaded. That doesn't even seem important but okay it's a back foot where you can't even tell but okay.

Getting a tad sassy, are we? xD Could you darken the head shading a tad? If you think it's fine though, then don't do anything to it. He's a handsome little thing. =) 23:14, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

I was more confused than anything, not sassy. I'd rather not darken the head shading, as I think it might clash with the ear pink a bit too much- I don't put my ear pink below the shading.

Furled Bracken (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Tiger does it again. =P 03:15, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Very pretty~ =) nice job. 03:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks 03:48, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Eye depth could still be defined, try switching the place here the dark part of the eye starts. 11:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Mew 15:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws a tad. 15:46 Sat Feb 14

Re-upped 16:06, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you give the shading a bit more depth? 00:55, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 01:01, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define your lightsource? Some paws are telling me it's coming from <== and the tail is telling me it's coming from ==> really pretty ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:00, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 04:17, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

The lightsource still looks off. Please clarify the direction the light is coming from. 16:23, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it fine. It looks like it's coming from the left. However, the shading on the tail looks like it's leaking. 16:27 Tue Feb 17

Not really, considering the chest, tail, and a couple legs say left, and the head and another leg say right. I'd say it still needs a little clarifying. :/ 16:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have another opinion or a redline of what you want it to look like? I'm a bit confused. 23:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Lol I apologize ahead of time, this is a very rough one since I did it very quickly..here's the redline of what I'd probably do if I was doing that lightsource. Again it's very rough, and you can style it your own way. Hope it helps. =) 03:57, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for neglecting this. 00:58, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Petal (Ro) (Star) ~ For Approval
She's a beauty :p comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Simply lovely! Add a  bit of shading to her side maybe? 15:01, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Um, that is a bit vague, I don't get what you mean. I added shading to her side as the light is coming from ==> there. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 15:06, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? It looks dark on my phone, but if you think it's fine then leave it. she's pretty 15:52 Sun Feb 15

On my phone it looks fine. 16:53, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Looks perfect on my iPad and Mac,don't change anything yet! 🐈 -- 17:26, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit. 22:52 Sun Feb 15

Re-ups thanks guys :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:45, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the Earpink, please? 17:06, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink looks fine, but you could lighten the shading on the ears. Also The Fox Girl you might want to move your signature into a template - it takes up a lot of space on the editor. 21:01 Mon Feb 16 2015

I'm not sure how to fix the ear pink... I put the layer above my shading so I can't Lighten it there. And I color picked from her other images. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:31, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Simply beautiful! Maybe do a highlight of the ears, that works for me. she is my baby great job!

Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:34, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define nose pink a tad it looks kinda black :/ -- 14:39, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine, and I'm not changing it. 15:19, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body are a bit too pixely compared to her other images...the ones on her queen are a bit smoother as well, and I'm pretty sure that's the side you should be matching..

Re-uploaded I tried, if you guys think it's still pixely, then inform me. 04:37, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Talon (Loner) ~ For Approval
Two new cats for approval on the approval page within a minute XD Comments? I'm proud of this. 08:34, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws? He's handsome. 13:27, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you~ 13:33, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define ear pink, other than that he's gorgeous! 😃 -- 17:30, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

I color picked from his other images, and I can see it fine. But thank you =) 03:32, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur/smudge(whatever you did with this one) the neck shading a tad? This is a gorgeous image, well done Burntclaw. =) 23:09, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you. 05:00, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Ancient) ~ Withdrawn
Meow... 16:57, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

This file should be named "Owl Feather.ancient.png. Can you smudge the speckles, define the earpink, and add shading please? ^^ 17:00, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Also, remember to reserve each new charart. I did it for you. 17:03, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the Earpink? I cant see any. Also, what program do you use? 17:05, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest above all other programs GIMP. I also see a white pixel over < on the paw. 23:12, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Also, the body color seems to be overlapping the lineart. I suggest using layers. 23:43, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re - Upped 23:45, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

used layers 23:46, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and where is your light coming from? It seems to be in random splotches on the body. Try to figure out which direction your light is coming from (straight above, up and to the left, up and to the right, the right, the left, etc.) and where the shadows would fall on the body due to where the light is. For example, if the light is to the left of the body, the right side of the head, the right edge of the tail, the right edge of those front legs, the hip, and the chest would be in shadow, and there would be almost no shading on the top of the back. Would you like me to do a redline? Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:49, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

I made a little redline of what I kind of do on my ancients. Yeah it is weird, but it gets the point across. xD 01:03, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

This also should be named Owl Feather.ancient. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:46, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

First time huh? Be patient with yourself, it takes time to learn these things. Remove that lighter brown around his legs if you can.-- 06:13, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, shouldn't this be removed since Frogtail isn't archived yet? Sorry, just something I noticed. <span style="">16:21 Tue Feb 17

Should we remove it? Not wanting to ditch every charart I do, but are there any plain furred cats that need chararts? -- 04:18, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing :( -- 14:42, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

I changed the heading for you. When you withdraw an image, you need to change the heading to "CHARACTER (Rank) ~ Withdrawn". 14:56, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can someone please archive this -- 14:37, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Be patient, Sunstream. It has only been a day. 15:20, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Ancient) ~ For Evaulation
First time trying! Comments?✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 09:45, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Your title needs to say "Shy Fawn Ancient - For Evaluation" since you're kit. Very nice for a first charart. :) Define the shading on the chest and face, and erase a bit of the shading on the right side of the left front leg. Jayie   Unwritten <span style="color:#00CFFf;font-family:Times New Roman;">words~  09:50, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty :) Define the shading on the tail a bit. 09:55, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Also, you needed to reserve it. I've done it for you this time, but you must keep in mind that you have to reserve something before posting it in the future. 09:58, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, I've never contributed much with this page so i don't know anything 0.0 sorry for mistakes everywhere! :P✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 11:41, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

@Jayie this is not the first time for me to do a charart tbh, but it's the first time for me to do an actual character...✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 04:34, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok. I suggest that you might want to darken the shading. Everywhere. (Besides the neck, face, chest, and front paws." I would also brighten up the shading one the hind paw aswell.   20:41, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Ancient) ~ For Approval
i know there should be texture i will add that in the next upload <span style="">15:35 Tue Feb 17

Blur and lighten up the shading, looking good ^^. 15:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">15:47 Tue Feb 17

Blur/smudge the shading some more, it still looks pretty hard-edged. Also, have the texture flow more with the direction of the fur. Nice job =) 20:04, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a bit? It looks really dark. Nicely done! =3 23:48, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add more depth to her eyes ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:04, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">21:59 Wed Feb 18

Lighten up the shading quite a bit more, it's really dark. <span style="">1:54 Thu Feb 19

re-ups i just spotted the waste under her i'll fix that in a sec <span style="">12:35 Thu Feb 19

the shading is still very hard edged, especially on the haunch. 12:36, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

if i blur it any more its going to look gross <span style="">12:56 Thu Feb 19

Lighten up the shading, and it still could be smoothed out. Also, define the texture, I can barely tell it's there. 14:13, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Curve the texture a bit more to try and match with the flow of fur, particularly when it transitions from one body part to the other. The direction of light is confusing as well due to the head and tail shading. Nice job! 00:03, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

tbh i'm just going to redo the shading and the texture <span style="">00:05 Fri Feb 20

reups the shading is now smudged, will darken texture if necessary <span style="">01:50 Fri Feb 20

The texture looks a bit thick and blotchy, try using an airbrush and run over the image until it looks like texture. Lighten up the shading too. 03:16, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

The white splotches looks like it is above the shading layer. could you put it back underneath so it looks more.. shaded? and tbh, I think the hind leg still needs to be smudged or blurred more. 21:49, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">02:55 Sat Feb 21

The texture is still blotchy... Try using a paintbrush then adjusting the opacity. The shading is very hardedged, try smudging the edges with a hard edged smudge tool. 10:32, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (Alt KP) ~ For Approval
Hi, here is my adorable fluffball w/ mascara on(it was completely intentional xD). Now I can't remember if she's supposed to have a collar with this one or not.. :/ Let me know. Comments? 00:32, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a bit, other than that she is lovely! P.S Love the mascara! :P ~ 00:53, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

She wasn't shown with a collar, so she doesn't get it for this alt. Also, smudge the patches with a hard-edged brush, like the alt MC.

Re-uploaded. Lol thank you. And I had smudged them already, but I smudged them a bit more for ya. 02:40, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Please crop the image- there's too much extra spacing between the edge of the image and the lineart.

Re-uploaded. Huh, I don't even know how that happened. I just use the blanks as they are..maybe when I was making some practice-kittypet it got screwed up somehow..whoops. 03:00, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back. I like her. <span style="">12:31 Thu Feb 19

Add a little more shading at the <-- leg. 20:33, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Gia. =) 23:01, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Where's your light source coming from? 03:19, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

It's coming from the left. I know, the back shading is making it look confused..it was very faint, but I defined it for Gia. I can try to even out the other half of the back shading, or I could do away with it. Either way is fine with me, just tell me what to do. 14:54, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Nah I was just a tad confused about the source, but now I can see it. :3 10:28, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Although, could you define the shading on the ears? 14:05, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Dawn River (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I hate this pattern 14:52, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blue out the shading on the cheek a little more. 20:37, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reups That's a typo meaning for me to blur it, right? Well, I smudge my shading, so I smudged it a bit more instead. 22:19, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, its a typo. Sorry for the confusion. 22:28, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten it up a teeeeeny bit on the haunch it looks a little bit dark how did you even do this 09:33, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups I have no idea 10:59, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

smudge the shading on the front leg closest to us, like where it bends <span style="">02:23 Sat Feb 21

Mistlekit (TPB) (ki) - For Approval
Kiscicaaa :) 15:10, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading one the front legs. 20:32, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Which of the front legs do you mean? Although maybe define it on both? 03:00, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think they mean on the legs, not one the legs, which would indicate both. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:18, February 20, 2015 (UTC)