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Cloudmist (Lo) ~ For Evaluation
First charart! Hopefully this goes well. The turtorials were really useful. Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job for your first one! Smudge the shading and lighten it a bit though. 04:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded (thank you! :) ) - Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:06, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if you're aware, but her base on the apprentice image is pure white. I can't tell because the brightness on my desktop is lowered right now.

There are some sharp white pixels on the <--- front leg (where it meets the rest of the body) and on the other front leg towards the shoulder. Probably just missing some shading there. :P 19:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded My screen was at max brightness, but lowered it now and managed to find the white spots. It still looks sorta white to me, but I tried to pale the shading to hopefully make it look less gray if it did. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the image, for instance the belly? — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  14:38, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light a bit on the legs and tail. 00:51, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure about the depth Shadowbright67 (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe just add a touch more depth to the shading, and define the light on the paws again

Maybe darken the ear pink? Shypaw11 (talk) 21:54, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart on the belly, near the <--- leg. 02:16, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Couldn't really catch the shading off-lineart so I'm not sure if its still there after using the eraser by the leg and belly. Shadowbright67 (talk) 03:57, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Leaking away from the lineart means it's not reaching the edge of the lineart. On the belly, there's white space between the lineart and the rest of the shading, it's right by the edge of the leg at the bottom of the belly. 03:10, January 9, 2017

This is probably minor, but the nose color on the apprentice image is a very different color :) 02:18, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Right, thanks for explaining what it meant. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:14, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Just smooth out the shoulder shading and then it'll seem good to go. 23:37, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sort of changed eye color, because at first, I saw it silverish, but when I got on my phone, it looked pale blue. Shadowbright67 (talk) 01:31, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Her eyes are meant to be blue. Did you get the colors from the apprentice image or the warrior image that I have posted below? You're required to match the apprentice image in terms of coloring.

At first, I tried apprentice, but my laptop was too bright so I just went on to warrior eye color. I'll darken it tomorrow, since I can't do anything in the app I'm using. (Just noticed that the fur is looking silvery-white, so I'm going to make it paler.)  Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:45, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Near the rump area, it looks like there is some smudged pixels and the shading seems to be a bit off..Sorry if I'm wrong and it's supposed to be like that!𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 07:11, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Wavepaw (A) - For Approval
she's waving buh-bye to 2016 too 03:11, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Thank god this terrible year is over. Define the light on the back paws. 02:19, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:38, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear. 03:34, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a little bit? 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:25, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yes, I forgot to say I was going to be gone for this week but I messaged Cloudy 00:06, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the silver patches seem a little dark to be silver, and not just gray. Also, I'm having a hard time making out what are the white patches, what's silver, and what's shading on the face. Maybe define all of that a little? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:00, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:44, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Silver still looks too dark. 00:47, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:14, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading c: 17:19, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:36, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define teh shading more. 23:37, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:39, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) - For Evaluation
I am a lot happier with this one! I like her eyes. 02:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reup 02:57, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading again please. 03:03, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:12, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the body (sorry that I'm not giving you a break). 03:37, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the <-- side 03:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be darkened - but it's probably the tint. Is the layer on Multiply? Try that if it's not, or change the brightness setting/saturation/contrast setting =)

Reuploaded 04:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste from the above <-- hip all the way to the underside of the tail. 04:42, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:36, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the eye-depth

​Reuploaded 21:50, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of shading to the collar? 00:14, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the bottom of the tail, and possibly darken the shading? 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:24, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading more. 15:12, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:59, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

darken the shading. not define, but darken. somewhere there should be a menu for "Hue" or "Brightness," for example, in firealpaca it's under filter. i believe that's what you use? anyway, darken it. 00:45, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:10, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's actually quite a bit of very light waste all around the image. 03:12, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:07, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the collar shading?

Reuploaded 22:48, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but shading appears to be leaking away from the lienart along the back, tail, and left cheek. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:06, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:21, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the eye depth a bit. 21:04 Wed Jan 11

Reuploaded 21:55, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

There's like a bump in the lineart at the front of the front leg. I think it's waste.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:34, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I erased all along there and there isn't a bump? did you mean the part of the collar?? There isn't anything. 00:40, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) - For Approval
Why was shading this so frustrating? 00:14, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

It looks as though there's an unfilled pixel on the <--- ear. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:21, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Messed with the shaidng, but as far as I can see, there aren't any unfilled pixels in the ears. 00:24, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 13:01, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, but the hue seems to shift throughout the pelt for me. It looks sort of pale yellow, but that may be the shading. 23:14 Wed Jan 11

Re-uploaded. The base color is completely gray and the same throughout, so it must have been the shading as you suggested. I made the shading pure black instead of tinted, hopefully that fixed the issue (although it didn't look yellowish to me?). 21:20, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 5) ~ For Approval
He has a russet alt and a pale ginger alt, but he was also called dark ginger. Comments? 14:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Dull down the neon. 17:08, 1/08/2017

Reuploaded. 20:03, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs 23:38, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:02, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the belly color a bit? Looks too blotchyTawnyBracken (talk) 09:05, January 11, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. It was already smudged, but I went and smudged it a little more. 20:04, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back foot that we can see all of. It doesn't seem like there's shading there at all, when there kinda has to be. Also define the light on the tail.

Reuploaded. 13:33, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen the stripes a bit? When I first saw this, I thought you just drew lines on it. Sorry if I'm giving too much criticism...TawnyBracken (talk) 00:31, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. I redid the stripes, as I like this pattern a bit better. 01:24, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the stripesTawnyBracken (talk) 02:22, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to smudge the stripes, as they are only a few pixels wide at most, and smudging them would make them look distorted, to the point where one might not be able to tell they are stripes. 19:45, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck and also on the upper back area. 22:19, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:13, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Clovertail (E) ~ For Approval
16:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading a bit?

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  20:50, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and lighten the neck a bit! Good work!TawnyBracken (talk) 04:11, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

reuploaded why would i lighten it when it's the same as the rest of the shading 20:06, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Cloudmist (W) - For Approval
will eventually tweak shading I think. All colors from apprentice file.

I know you said you might tweak the shading, but can you make the tail shading less lumpy (there's basically just a part in the middle that's not as shaded as the top and bottom), and try to define light/shade on the legs as you do that? Lovely white kitteh

Re-uploaded.

Define the earpink a little bit! :) 17:17, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Redclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
meh  01:20 Tue Jan 10 

The earpink looks a bit different than the other image. Nice pattern! :D 02:13, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

holy crap this is awesome It could be my screen, but I'm seeing the shading to be... light green that it's kinda odd? Maybe shift the tint or darken it a tad?

Reups Yea that's cus it is green shading. I darkened it some, but if you want me to change the tint I can. green shading on a red cat probably wasnt my brightest idea lmao (but thanks)    20:15 Tue Jan 10 

I think the tint is fine. Mind smudging the ---> ear pink a bit? 05:20, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded  11:13 Sat Jan 14 

Stagleap (TR) (Star) - CBA
Hello heavy texture <33 <span style="">19:51 Tue Jan 10

Gorgeous. Define the light on the tail a bit. 04:58, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is as much as I'm able to define it. <span style="">16:55 Wed Jan 11

Lighten the shading a bit? I have nothing else to say about this other then 'This is AMAZING!' Good work!!TawnyBracken (talk) 03:31, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Thank you ^^ But can I get a second opinion on the shading opacity? I'm only asking because this isn't any darker than his other images. <span style="">15:54 Fri Jan 13

I think it's fine personally. Like you said, it's similar to his other images. 16:04, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

I agree, the shading darkness looks fine to me. CBA? 00:45, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Thistleheart (Star) ~ For Approval
20:57, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten and smudge the shading in the direction of fur on the body instead of...every direction if you know what I mean? I thought this was a gray and white for a second =P

Recede/erase away some of the shading on the face, it feels like there's too much of it in shadow based on how much light is on the back. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 04:52, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:54, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Amazing! Alot better then I could do...lighten the shading a bit, looks gray on the flank and paws a tiny bitTawnyBracken (talk) 00:32, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Thanks! 13:30, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

The ear tips look a bit gray, like Snowfur's𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 23:15, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Stormheart (W) ~ For Approval
First warrior. Meh - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  20:48, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the gray a tad. She's looking like a ginger and white. <span style="">21:02 Wed Jan 11

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  22:25, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading 01:02, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

The gray base is #CFCFCF, and the ginger base is #C6730A. It looks how it does due to the reddish tint that I have for the patches on the kit. The stripes are also smudged, not blurred, although that's extremely difficult to see here. Also shorten the tail patch, as it's only meant to be about halfway. Also blur the edges of the ginger a bit, as they're also that way on the kit. Define the ear pink as well.

Smooth out the stripes definitely and fix the shading on the arm, looks like a blotch.TawnyBracken (talk) 00:33, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Wetfoot (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Comments? XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 02:39, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Add texture and make the stripes next to the eyes thinner. And blur/smudge the shading more on the flank and chest. 02:44, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

ReDone :) XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 02:49, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the belly, right next to the --> leg, as well as some other places. (Leaking away from the lineart means it gets lighter near the lineart) 03:05, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the flank a bit? Other then that the eyes and markings are amazing!!TawnyBracken (talk) 03:08, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Define/sharpen the stripes 03:10, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

 Redone  Srry, could only do Cinder's criticism. I will fix the rest tommorow. X) XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 03:14, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

 Redone  XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 11:32, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the stripes/spots and extend the stripes to meet the edges of the body. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  19:59, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

 Redone  XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 20:18, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is still leaking away from the lineart on the vest, specifially the fur line there, as well as a bit by the  ---> leg, though that might just be my eyes.

Add some more spots to that blank patch. And the stripes need to be closer together and there needs to be more of them. 16:04, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smokefoot (Star) - For Evaluation
This didn't take very long, but I did my best! Phew...comments? :D

I fixed the heading, please remove the white background from the image 04:05, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Also, dull down the earpink, it looks too neon. 04:06, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Cinderpool, I don't know how to get rid of the white because this is my first chartart :( Can you tell me how to in the Warriors chat?TawnyBracken (talk) 04:11, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

I removed the alignments — remember to not align them. Also, define the shading on the arm and tail. 04:21, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

You have to acknowledge that you reuploaded the image so people know. Also, this has to be titled Smokefoot.star.png. Also, I've already said not to align your images and it is still aligned. I removed it again. 04:47, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Add more depth into the eye, and shading is out from the outline in below the chest, right from the right leg, underneath belly between left leg and tail, and above the tail by the back. Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:31, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploadedTawnyBracken (talk) 06:07, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Removed alignment. Reupload a new version of file instead of re-adding pic. You can click your charart image, tap on More Info, then go to file history and click ''Upload a new file. ''Shadowbright67 (talk) 06:22, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-because I forgot to shade the ear X3TawnyBracken (talk) 06:59, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-uploaded𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 07:29, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-uploaded to darken the eyes and smoothen out the shading𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:32, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

I think the ear pink is leaking off her head and the shading is leaking from the base of her tail. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  12:04, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 12:48, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Changed it to evaluation. This is your first one (I think) and you need to add yourself to the table and reserve this image. 16:13, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Blur shading. Also, why does it say that Applebreeze is doing this on the table. O_O 23:45, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:59, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Wrenflight (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Comments? First one! Spottedfire12 (talk) 07:56, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and smudge the ear. Great job on the eyes though!𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:00, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

''Re-up! ''Spottedfire12 (talk) 08:07, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe round off the shading on the flank? You could check out right here -->http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/8/8d/Shading_Placement.tutorial.png/revision/latest?cb=20160918192656 For shading advice if you need any because it doesn't match the shading placement𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:09, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Spottedfire12 (talk) 08:17, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken the eyes𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:35, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Spottedfire12 (talk) 08:40, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define/Darken a bit (but not too much) the shading on the face/head and tail. It's kinda hard to see. 16:07, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 01:08, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the flank :) 01:42, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups  01:51, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth a little? Also, I think the flank shading could use smoothing, if only to give it more depth

Foggy (Ro) (R) - For Evaluation
First charart! ^^ Comments? 03:52, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading everywhere, a bit. Also, define the eye depth. :) It looks great! 03:56, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 04:03, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Maube smudge/smoothen it a bit more? Near the flank, mainly. 04:04, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Redone  04:07, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but it looks like he has a blueish tint to him𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 06:30, January 15, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

^That's probaby the tinted shading, which is fine^^ but I do think that the tint could be darkened by a bit

Redone  14:31, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front paws, and smooth the body shading? Also define the shading on the --> back paw

Redone  19:43, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the <-- back leg.

Shading could be smoothed out a bit. 00:37, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Redone  00:48, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Dawnflower (K) ~ For Approval
-- 15:45, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Add shading to the hind paw, and add texture. 15:58, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think this needs texture, only her StarClan image has it. Shypaw11 (talk) 16:27, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink and define the eye depth :) 16:27, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps define the light on the image more; shading seems to cover most of it

Define your light source. Ps...The StarClan image does not have texture...that's smudged shading o_o. I'm the OA of her StarClan image and that is definitely not how I do texture.. <span style="">19:42 Sun Jan 15

There's some waste beneath the <--- front paw and near the ---> flank. 19:44, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Fix the shading𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 19:58, January 15, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

As Sunjaw said, define the light source, and add light to the <-- leg. 00:20, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure what you mean by "Fix the shading" and reuploaded --  00:02, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

There is still waste beneath the front paw, and define shading on the tail. 00:04, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the <-- leg, as well as the light source. 00:20, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly think that the shading overall could be lessened (there's not much light on the chest) and also defined. 00:47, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Hold on, pixlr isn't letting me edit the file... :( --  01:05, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Night (HJ) (K) ~ For Approval
Comments? 01:22, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

This file needs to be named File:Night (HJ).kit.png since it's a kit image

Redone 02:48, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

The white seems to be a bit blue, not sure if it's just me...❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 03:14, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Duckkit (K) - For Approval
All colors are from the kit. 02:22, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Amazing! I don't know if it's my screen or not, but define the shading?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:57, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

The stripes look a bit darker than the ones on the StarClan image. Shypaw11 (talk) 03:19, January 16, 2017 (UTC)User:Shypaw11 (talk)Shypaw11 (talk) 03:19, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Flailfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
02:27, January 16, 2017 (UTC)