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Reedwhisker (Rogue) ~ CBA
very filthy repost, I apologize if I break a rule or anything for this --

Not sure if you are or not, but if not, smooth the shading and define the light. 04:48, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

You aren't breaking a rule, Neon. We do not tell users they cannot repost unless they break the one month rule.

Define the ear pink? 20:20, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried lightening it to contrast against his black fur, so it'd pop out and be more visible --

Does the ear pink match the other images? The pink in the deputy looks lighter than this. 14:56, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the image?

Re-uploaded I think it's the light? Also, how do I define it, Spooky? I forgot. --

I don't know how other people do it, but I just erase shading where I want my light-source to be with low opacity set in the eraser, then I smudge/blur it. That might work? -- 20:44, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded did it work??? --

Smooth the shading on the tail? 21:12, 5/05/2017

Re-uploaded --

Smoothen out all the shading, but especially on the head. 06:17, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --

There's a speck of waste by the booty 12:55, 5/08/2017

Re-uploaded I found that funnier than I probably should, Snow. --

Lmaoo, can you define the eye depth as well as the light in the eye? 21:51, 5/09/2017

And smooth the head shading a little more and define the light on the back paw/leg farthest from us? 23:39, 5/09/2017

Re-uploaded Fact: I turn my dark cats a dark red when fixing their shading to see it better, and I nearly uploaded red Reedwhisker oml --

Define the light on both the farthest legs. 02:36, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --

The earpink looks a purplish compared to the other images - unless that's because of your shading tint, then you can disregard this. But it really does look purple imo

Pretty sure it's the blue shading tint -- I turned my shading layers off, compared the earpink to some from the deputy, and found they were the same hex code. --

Earpink does give a purple tint under blue shading or anything really *whispers* color theoryyyy But anyway smooth the flank shading a little more? 01:26, 5/12/2017

Re-uploaded --

Smooth the body shading 21:07, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded near-red Reedwhisker count - 2 --

There's waste above the base of the tail 22:37, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --

Smooth shading some more please, especially on main body and legs, nose needs to be black, eye color is much brighter/darker than other images, and I know earpink color was discussed above and it might be fine but you could add a new layer with the same earpink color, put it above shading layers and reduce opacity so that it at least looks pink

Nevermind about eye color. His description says he has brilliant blue eyes but the other images look silver. So yeah this one's fine

Re-uploaded I tried to smooth it out with a hard-edged rate 100 blur and got nothing out of it, how am I supposed to smooth further? --

Hmm maybe lightening shading opacity a bit would make it appear smoother?

Re-uploaded --

Define shading a tad. Nice job on this! 21:07, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --

Maybe lighten the shading? It looks a bit too shady.--Streamdapple (talk) 19:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)Streamdapple

I may get shot for this, but it looks like if they lighten the shading any more, they'll get told to define it again (by me nonetheless). Plus it might just be your screen that's making it look like it's all in shading. So, I'm gonna CBA this. 21:30, 5/15/2017

Strong Pounce (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay let's try this again shall we? —  Minkclaw   13:28, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg farthest from us? Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, May 4, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Re-Ups —  Minkclaw   19:17, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little, and expand the light on the chest. 20:44, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste on the right side of the image and by the paws. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light to < front leg 14:32, 5/06/2017

Define the tail shading 14:39, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any earpink?

Still working? 22:53, 5/08/2017

Yes, it hasn't been a week yet. Yes there is ear shading, usually a cat's ear shading with be close to that of the base pelt or the color of their ears. I'll have it uploaded tomorrow. —  Minkclaw   19:52, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Mink, we ask if you're still working after 4 days, and no one asked if there was any ear shading??? 23:45, 5/09/2017

Winter I think they meant ear pink, not ear shading. 01:04, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I did my apologies and I was aware it was a week, that's what I was always told? —  Minkclaw   13:09, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Its declined after a week, but we ask after 4 days.. 13:23, 5/10/2017

Ah well my apologies then. —  Minkclaw   16:22, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   19:08, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink, I'm having trouble seeing it. Branchwing (talk) 21:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, define the light on the < leg. This needs to have dark brown ears, as as far as I can see, it's just earpink that's leaking around the ear. Get rid of some shading on the chest and add some shading along the base of the neck/chin, and define the eye depth 01:28, 5/12/2017

Also maybe smoothen out the ear pink too 01:34, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste along <- side, the back paw's lineart isn't black, eyes should be more yellow

I think the eyes are fine, their pretty yellow as is. And considering there's no other image to match I can keep them the color they are. I can see the ear pink just fibe can I get a second on that? —  Minkclaw   19:52, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's going to be dark brown ears, so the ear pink is going too blend into that and be invisible, since it's a little too dark. And it couldn't hurt to make the eyes more yellow, it looks like it's more on the brown side, honestly. 20:02, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Of course you see the earpink fine because it's your image :/ I do agree it's going to turn invisible soon, so maybe try lightening it or changing the color? It doesn't have to be super dark to look good 04:27, 5/15/2017

I can't distinguish the dark brown ears from the ear pink at all. It just looks like a giant blotch of color. I also agree about the eyes as well; they could stand to be shifted at least a bit.

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:14, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. <span style="">21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink <span style="">01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray <span style="">16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Theres waste by the butt <span style="">13:45, 5/09/2017

Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--  22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one

Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall <span style="">23:50, 5/09/2017

Reups --  20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images.

Reups --  02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place <span style="">02:43, 5/11/2017

Is there chest shading? If not, add some. 02:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define flank shading? Nice. :3 03:22, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  04:02, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The placement of the gray doesn't match completely. Especially check the warrior image, as you can see the difference between the shades better there, and also how there's a more defined patch of gray on the face.

Define the shading more <span style="">01:29, 5/12/2017

Reups --  02:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Ok I think the gray should match the elder's image since it was lightened/tweaked before the others and if that's the case then this is too dark, also the gray looks softer than the other images, and it's still kinda hard to tell what's gray and what's shading on the chest and front legs

Well, I was just asked to match the warrior image so I'm not sure what to do when critiques contradict each other :/ --  16:05, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The critiques, at least the recent one where I said to match the warrior image, don't contradict. I was talking about the gray placement, such as on the muzzle (which from what I can see, still hasn't been done). Snow is talking about the coloring, which is a separate issue, and also the coloring in other spots not previously mentioned.

There's a stray white pixel on the <--- paw. 21:08, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more <span style="">21:31, 5/15/2017

Leafstar (Alt W.) ~ For Approval
how does one charart 21:12, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the texture a lit'l, and soften the white?

I think the shading is leaking by the belly on the curve of the hind leg <span style="">16:04, 5/07/2017

reuploaded the homework is threatening to drown me why did i leave it until now 23:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white patches? 23:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:23, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to brighten the patches more (try removing the brown on it), and give them a good blur/smudge, they look a little chalky.

Um, I don't think you can really brighten white guys? But maybe smooth the shading and lighten it just a smidge? Maybe that's why everyone's saying to lighten 'em^ <span style="">02:34, 5/09/2017

Yeah it is possible, Broken. I usually duplicate the layer the white is on and adjust the opacity until I get the desired brightness. I'm sure there are other ways, but that's how I normally do it. 03:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Or the dodge tool. :) Is it just me or is the muzzle darker than the rest of the image? Is that shading? 03:59, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the tabby pattern? I think she's meant to have tabby stripes anyway 21:36, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded defined + blurred white patches, got rid of the darker muzzle, and redid the tabby pattern with a thicker brush 21:55, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs and the tail, and define the light on the legs after you define the shading. The shading is also leaking on the < ear, and possibly remove the shading on the front of the chest, as that wouldn't be there in your source. The shading is also leaking along the back of the neck and the back itself, smooth the patch of white on the base of the tail and brighten the white more, it's looking like a milky-cream/white <span style="">23:52, 5/09/2017

Give the stripes more variation and make them curve around the body rather than just flat lines.

reuploaded 00:51, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a little bit, or at least add some depth. 01:56, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I think you missed a patch of shading on the bum by the base of the tail <span style="">02:44, 5/11/2017

Smooth <- ear shading and tail shading, also define light on the two legs closest to us and on the shoulder, aaand I think there's a few pixels of waste above the -> ear and by the nose

I don't know really how these pages work, but I think the white patches could be little creamier. I'm sorry I don't know how to sign this.

Crestpaw, they're supposed to be white. Also, sign posts by typing four ~ 03:18, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's a dark line on the spot where the muzzle meets the neck. Mind smoothing it out? 21:11, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:17, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Seedpelt (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
ErmineGlow (talk) 00:02, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups got rid of some waste. ErmineGlow (talk) 00:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define the shading depth some. 00:14, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth 00:36, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle shading. 01:13, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the tail, and it looks like you erased some of the lineart around the whiskers, paws, chin, and tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 02:41, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more. It should be more of a gradient. 11:14, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

You have very odd smudges in your shading that conflict with the pattern, mind fixing that? <span style="">12:49, 5/08/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:02, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups For some reason the changes to the shading didn't appear, so I tried again. Me thinks it is better now. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:05, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">21:06, 5/08/2017

Reups Me terrible at shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a lot 21:52, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Ermine, what tool are you using for smoothing the shading? Because it kind of looks like the burn tool, and that's not a good tool to use. If you have a watercolor tool, I'd advise using that, or a blur tool in general. Are you using a mouse or a tablet? <span style="">23:03, 5/08/2017

I used the paint tool for the darkest part of the shading that follows the lineart, then the lighter parts were made by either the paint tool on a low opacity or the burn tool. I am using a mouse. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:55, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

The burn tool is mostly good for making shading, not smoothing it. Also, there's a patch of shading missing on the ---> paw, sorry if that was said already. 03:03, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Recede the white on the cheek. On the warrior, the white is lower below the eye so there's more brown space there than on here. Also, I think the white above the nose should be smudged a bit more upwards to match the warrior  03:40, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:09, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste on the upper part of the tail. --

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:17, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a lot more, it's all over the place. And define the light on the legs <span style="">23:54, 5/09/2017

Define the light everywhere actually 02:05, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the face, it seems in shadow. --Streamdapple (talk) 10:47, May 10, 2017 (UTC)Streamdapple

Also, can you smooth out the shading overall, especially the body? Also, what program is this, again? --

Btw this should be for evaluation, as you never had an image approved <span style="">13:32, 5/10/2017

Getting an image approved is not the requirement. Knowing the basics is. The heading will stay at for approval.

Reups I used the blur and smudge tool to try and smooth out the shading, and Neon, I am using Pixlr ErmineGlow (talk) 21:09, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you try Gaussian blurring? It is your choice, I suppose, but it would make the shading more realistic. Just make a new layer, paint over where you want to shade. Then go to the tab "Filter" and select Gaussian Blur. Choose your blurring rate and you're done. --  22:26, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Not sure if it looks any different ErmineGlow (talk) 22:42, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading some more. Branchwing (talk) 01:19, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Gussian blurring on shading does not work. You have to use the regular blur tool and set it to whichever rate suits you best. And using the burn tool doesn't work either. Ermine, does the program you're using have a blur tool? <span style="">03:28, 5/11/2017

Yeah,it does. Tomorrow when I get to reuploading I can try it. ErmineGlow (talk) 03:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Broken, gaussian blur does work, you just have to know how to use it :/ <span style="">04:12, 5/11/2017

Reups I tried usin the blur tool. ErmineGlow (talk) 13:00, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I can see tons of blurred lineart and some | dark spots in the shading, can you fix that? --

Could you define the ear pink on the right ear(-->) KatsCandy (talk) 23:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Your vvcap didn't work, Neon ErmineGlow (talk) 00:22, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more and define the light on the head and legs <span style="">01:31, 5/12/2017

Reups He looks really surprised ErmineGlow (talk) 23:21, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, recede the face shading a bit, the shading looks blotchy (smoothing should help that), recede shading on the <--- front leg, define the light on the tail. Smudge the arm white a bit where it meets the brown to match the warrior image. 00:51, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Didn't do anything to the white yet, waiting for SnowedLightning's answer on how they did it. ErmineGlow (talk) 01:51, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The base color looks slightly too dark, smooth shading more and define shading and eye depth. I think the white on the face should extend a little above the eyes (in the middle), but the part under the eye should be receded a little because on the warrior image it doesn't touch the eye. Lineart is blurred in multiple places

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:19, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Base color still looks dark, smooth shading more, define shading and eye depth again, and lineart is now too thick in places. For the lineart you could try putting the starclan blank on a layer above everything else and erase the white

On the main body, there seems to be a patch of shading that's really out of place. Do you mind erasing it? I can put a red circle where I'm talking about if you're confused. Branchwing (talk) 00:26, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I've used this sttyle of shading when told to smooth out the shading when I was doing Jessamys rogue image, so I think it is okay to use here. And Branchwing, I pretty sure I got the spot you were talking about. ErmineGlow (talk) 17:03, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this will help you but I circled all the areas I could see where there was missing, blurred, or too much lineart http://vvcap.com/o7adOIARmQ2 also base is still a little dark, shading could be smoothed more, especially on chest, and you still have not added/defined shading or eye depth, if you don't know how, just ask

Reups I've been smoothing out the shading with the blur tool, is there a better way? ErmineGlow (talk) 19:16, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

I think it's a matter of blending issues. Near the end of the shading of the main body, it looks green. You said you used Pixlr, correct? You might want to redo the shading completely with gaussian blur, but keep the original shading on a separate layer that's hidden. Then again, I don't use Pixlr, so I don't know exactly how it works. Branchwing (talk) 22:18, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth? <span style="">06:34, 5/15/2017

Reups I know the tail shading is wonky, I'll fix it soon. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:38, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define light on chest, paw/legs and face? Good job! 21:41, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I need help with the tail shading. When I try to use gaussian blur on it, it just makes like a box shape. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:03, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading <span style="">13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more <span style="">18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please <span style="">01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs <span style="">21:32, 5/15/2017

Pink Eyes (W) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? 18:00, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? Also, I'm sure the other images have texture. Cute^ <span style="">18:03, 5/10/2017

Reuploaded. I'm going to hold off on the texture, as I can't tell if it is actually texture or just the shading; If it's the latter, I'm not required to match it. 18:19, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

it looks like texture to me. 18:20, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Its texture. Also Bluestar, why did you change Brokens reservation??? That is a big no-no.. :/ im going to have to ask skye about this. <span style="">18:25, 5/10/2017

Reuploaded. Like I said, it was an accident. I didn't realize editing from the view changes page would revert any edits made in between. I know it now, so I won't do it again. 18:33, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth on the lower part of the haunch/backside?

Reuploaded. 22:15, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and define the light on the hind legs. 23:29, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the flank shading 23:30, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:40, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck/face. 02:01, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

CAn you lessen some of the shading on the neck/muzzle area? <span style="">02:30, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded. I used this exact same amount of head shading on Robinwing's warrior image, so I'd rather not if I don't have to. If others agree, though, I'll change it. 02:38, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I love this. Maybe define the shading on the front legs a bit? (Im sorry if this is nitpicky, I use google translate for my comments) Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Reuploaded. 17:12, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

defint the belly shading, the tail shading, and the light on the front legs. 18:42, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:54, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the shading depth could be defined some more near the butt <span style="">20:18, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded. 20:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The shading darkness doesn't match everywhere else as dark as it is on the booty, can you lighten that part please? <span style="">01:33, 5/12/2017

Reuploaded. 02:40, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the back paw that's farthest from us? It also looks like the shading's leaking a bit on the back, rump, and front leg closest to us, and maybe define texture

I can see the texture, but only by a small bit, and it looks like a bunch of scattered lines. Not sure if texture has to match 100% though <span style="">19:07, 5/15/2017

The texture is good as is, and you're right. It doesn't have to match 100%. Smooth the shading some more and can you try to make the shading depth spread out a little more, because it looks like it's all in one spot by the butt <span style="">21:33, 5/15/2017

Withdrawing. 21:41, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Gooseberry (W) ~ CBA
I tried... 19:34, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I wasn't sure if it was shading or not, but on the queen, isn't there texture? This is very nice <span style="">19:38, 5/10/2017

I don't think it's texture?? Idk. Maybe define the ear pink and define the shading on both farthest legs. 22:29, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's no texture =) but I think the stripes could be softer and more broken up, so try smudging it a bit more? This is so adorabbb <3333

Reups 23:31, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tiny bit more? <span style="">01:34, 5/12/2017

Reups 14:48, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

The earpink looks lighter than the earpink on the queen, tip of the tail is vey dark, also the color of the stripes on the queen looks more yellow

Reups The earpink on the queen is heavily under shading, so I colorpicked from the lighter parts. 14:43, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Pricklekit (WC) (Ki) - For Approval
My first image posted here... Hope you like it! Branchwing (talk) 22:23, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, define the shading depth, this needs a black tipped nose, define the light on the ---> front leg. Nice! 22:28, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think the black-tipped nose would be visible on this blank, as assuming that it's on the bridge of the nose is an assumption, and we don't make those here. <span style="">22:52, 5/10/2017

no it's not? dew nose has the exact same thing except with white. 23:33, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added the black tipped nose, considering the comment about Dew Nose. Also made her nose a little lighter to differentiate the tipped nose and the actual nose a little bit better, they would have been nearly the same color if I didn't. Hopefully I defined the shading enough. Branchwing (talk) 00:41, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! :) Smooth out shading depth a tad? 00:48, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the shading just a little bit? <span style="">04:52, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 21:37, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading again 01:28, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading itself is rather okay, but feel free to do so anyway. Define shading depth as well? <span style="">01:36, 5/12/2017

I feel like I could be defined just a wee bit on the legs(the shading) <span style="">06:09, 5/12/2017

Reuploaded Also changed the main color slightly, if you don't mind. I still have the hex code for the original color if you want me to change it back. Branchwing (talk) 14:38, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Make eyes look more yellow?

Reuploaded I just changed the hue a little bit, but I can repick the colors if you all think that's too close to gold or amber. Branchwing (talk) 12:28, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the legs and tail shading and smooth the ear pink 01:06, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have trouble defining things don't I. Especially the tail. But I think I'm doing the right thing. Branchwing (talk) 01:33, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

I think you know what you're doing, so I'll promote you to an apprentice. Smooth the shading some more <span style="">21:34, 5/15/2017

Snail Shell (W) ~ CBA
I took the colors from the es version I did, back when that was in use

As I said when the ES was up, the pattern is more flecked-like than you have it. I based his kit image off of Ashfur, and this really doesn't match all too well. I know it's a small blank, but... idk. They're meant to be small, round ones. These are way too big.

Reuploaded I hope this is better; not seeing the Ashfur resemblance other than the coloring, so I just redid the pattern and hope it looks better

Smooth the shading a little bit on the back legs, and define it a tad more on the front leg farthest from us. Also smooth the shading a little on the neck/back area where it's kind of by the shoulder <span style="">01:37, 5/12/2017

Reuploaded

It looks like the gray spots should be a little darker, and they seem sharper on the kit image

Reuploaded

Smooth the shading a tiny bit more on the legs closest to us <span style="">21:35, 5/15/2017

Reuploaded did that on both, but I already did smooth it on the back legs, so when I did it again it didn't make any difference. The patterning there makes it look sharp.

well if dat's the case. CBA? <span style="">22:32, 5/15/2017

Storm Pelt (W) - CBA
shading cats with splotchy pelts is hard; all colors from his other images. 14:13, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and scars, as I can hardly see them. Also, add the torn eartip. 17:05, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I remember adding that torn ear, I must have undone it. 19:59, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I know the colors are all from his other images, but maybe define the earpink just a tad? <span style="">20:16, 5/11/2017

he looks too dark comapred to his other images. I don't know if it's the shading or what. 20:32, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Could you thicken the lineart around the torn ear? And maybe lighten the color of the scars to match the ES better?

I don't see why Patch has to thicken the lineart around the ear? <span style="">21:36, 5/11/2017

There's waste outside the torn ear 21:39, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I went ahead and thickened the lineart a bit, defined the earpink and scars, and lightened his base color just a tad. 22:55, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking a little bit on the back leg furthest from us? And also, I know the light's coming from behind but I think the two farthest from us paws/legs would have some light on them on the very tops of their paws or something. Kind of like Sunjaw's image above if that helps explain better <span style="">01:40, 5/12/2017

Re-uploaded. I put the light more on the bottom of the paws, but I can change it to the top if it looks weird. 02:11, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

The color of the scars still looks different from ES

Well, Bluestar told him to define the scars, and asking for second opinions isn't allowed apparently, so he kinda had no choice(sorry if you're a girl) <span style="">01:31, 5/14/2017

Broken, stop it. You're being extremely hostile right now and you need to stop. Anyways, scars fade and change color all of the time, and I've got a few that do just that. Some of them even blend in so well that it looks like you don't even have them anymore. The coloring is fine and nowhere does it say the colors for the scars have to match 100%.

Define the light on the tail-tip? <span style="">21:36, 5/15/2017

Re-uploaded. 22:01, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">22:28, 5/15/2017

Slash (L) ~ For Approval
...woW <span style="">01:18, 5/12/2017

There's strange patch of darkness above the --> back leg... was that intentional? It looks darker than most of the rest of the shading. Branchwing (talk) 14:52, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yes its shading depth <span style="">02:12, 5/13/2017

It looks out of place compared to the rest of the shading, though. Could you smooth it out a bit?

Define the shading depth on the tail? This must have been difficult to pull off^ It's very pretty! <span style="">23:29, 5/13/2017

Smooth the markings n paler parts out a tad to better match the other images 23:33, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head. ErmineGlow (talk) 23:44, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Also, define the shading depth on the flank and > front leg 23:46, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The higher scar on <- front leg should be closer to the white stripe below it and I think the three scratches on the back leg should look like this http://vvcap.com/w09l8ZisTwf and should be a bit longer

Reuploaded Smoothed everything including little patch of shading above > back leg, defined depth on tail, the head shading didn't really need defining but i put some more shading depth there, and the flank is the part above the leg, danny, and that's pretty defined as is, considering branchwing's comment. and the front leg doesnt need any shading depth in my light source but i gave it a tiny bit. And fixed scars. it doesnt have to match 100% you know @snow (about the length), and besides his leg is curled up, theyre gonna be scrunched together <span style="">22:40, 5/14/2017

Loki (Ro) ~ For Approval
I dunno if the shading's too dark, because my monitor won't let me see it properly.

You need the hex codes for the fur, eyes or earpink at all? <span style="">01:28, 5/12/2017

Minor, but the nose should be a very dark red. 01:29, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Here's the hex code for the nose: 0d0504 Here's for the earpink:ab4538 And here's for the eyes: 9cff00 (shading tint is optional but here: 6f4dff) <span style="">01:34, 5/12/2017

Smooth the earpink a little more, shading is leaking on the belly by the back leg's bend, and define the shading on the front leg farthest from us <span style="">01:41, 5/12/2017

re-up @Broken I have the exact same hex code? The tint is probably throwing the pink off. Also define what you mean by leaking @Snow.

Leaking shading means exactly what it sounds like? It's leaking away from the lineart on the --> back leg's bend?? Unless you changed it already <span style="">07:20, 5/12/2017

Leaking shading means the shading doesnt go all the way where its supposed to. Also no broken its not by the back legs bend if you wouldve looked at my comment :/ i said on the belly by the back legs bend <span style="">12:27, 5/12/2017

Funny, front leg farthest from us is covered in shading, and I don't see the shading leaking on the belly near the back leg? Unless I'm just stupid?

Wait, I just checked the current projects list. It says Streamdapple had reserved this on the 2nd, while you reserved it recently... am I missing something, or isn't it theirs? 03:01, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

It was declined (and archived) due to lack of work, and an image is someone's until it's archived, so...does that answer your question? (unless I'm just answering this wrong)


 * Yes that does answer it. Thank you, and sorry. :) 05:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

you're welcome Winter. :)

Smooth shading on head a bit and shading is leaking a bit on both front legs

re-up yeah I forgot to put it because I'm out of order because I'm kinda sick. :(

Maybe smooth the shading on the main body and shoulder a bit? 20:49, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a more gray color than what it is now? It looks a little too neon to match the other image. The earpink you want to match is on > ear of the kittypet, and right now it looks too purple <span style="">21:37, 5/15/2017

Winter, Broken gave star the exact hex code, so it's probably the tint on the kittypet that makes it look odd 22:08, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Spider Paw (W) - For Approval
I didn't add the extra toe because on the Early Settler, it's on the side that's not showing, but I can add it. 01:48, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smoothed out shading. 01:53, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Smooth the shading just a tad more and define the light a little. 01:57, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you try to add it in? Just a little bump on his other foot would be ok <span style="">01:59, 5/12/2017

I was just about to comment to smooth the shading, but Snek already said that I feel like the light could be defined on the back paw <span style="">02:02, 5/12/2017

Well broken little did you know I also said to define the light already 02:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow. :p 02:27, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Gonna be of the unpopular opinion here, but I really don't think you'd need to show that extra toe at all. This blank doesn't show that side of the cat, and the lineart looks a little awkward and forced with how it is. The paw would have to be kinda twisted in order for it to show that toe anyways given how this blank is shown.

Reuploaded 02:33, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the ear on <--- side? Congratulations on 2 approved images :) <span style="">02:44, 5/12/2017

Reuploaded Thank you, Broken! :) 02:58, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the top of the head and the ear that is farthest away from us? 04:09 12 May 2017

Shading's leaking on the belly.

On the back leg closest to us, it looks like there's a spot of shading that should be smoothed. 14:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:33, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

I think the overall shading could be smoothed a little, but also particularly on the ears. In addition, I think the shading's leaking a bit on the haunch. 23:04, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:25, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading's still leaking on the belly and on the front leg closest to us. 04:08, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

For lack of better words, the shading near to the lineart looks really... pixely, moreso on the back and tail-tip, but in a few other spots too. Not sure if it's like blurred lineart or just something odd?

Reuploaded 17:53, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us, near the paw? I feel like the shading there ends abruptly. And, could you make the shading less pixely, as Spooky stated? Branchwing (talk) 18:01, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:08, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Looking good! Smooth the shading on the farthest ear 18:17, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 18:26, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading? And smooth shading on both ears, top of head, tail, and two paws further from us

Reuploaded 02:09, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a little bit? Branchwing (talk) 02:41, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:00, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like you smoothed shading in only some places. Please smooth all of it, define shading depth, and there's some smudged/blurred lineart at the tip of tail and by the neck

Reuploaded 03:43, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Give some shape to the flank shading, it looks like a straight line 03:46, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:05, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on all of the paws and the ear farthest from us. Branchwing (talk) 12:21, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:54, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the back shading just a small bit? This is cool^ <span style="">20:32, 5/14/2017

Reuploaded Thank you! 21:01, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Idk if it's just me, but the earpink and the shading are making it look like there's a stray gray pixel in the earpink. And define the shading more on the tail and add more shading to the back paw closest to us on the paw itself, as it looks like it fades away. ANd it looks like also that the shading is leaking on the legs. Smooth the shading more as well, and recede the shading a tiny bit on the top of the head, as if the light's coming from the < and up area, there wouldn't be that much shadow there <span style="">21:40, 5/15/2017

Reuploaded 21:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Star Flower (W) ~ CBA
after 200km of cycling + sunburn, i finally take a break with this image.

Define the shading or shading depth on the --> front leg? Very nice! <span style="">18:03, 5/12/2017

Re-uploaded Thank you <3

Define the legs shading 22:42, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Stripes should be a bit thinner and smudged more, make stripes on cheek more visible, curve tail stripes a bit, add white on underside of tail and <- side of legs (right now the white's on the -> side) It looks like the tail stripes are too light and the other stripes are too dark (but that could be because of shading) and there's a bit of blurred lineart by the thigh

Re-uploaded I've done this pattern for god knows how many times. The stripes are actually quite hard edged! And I used highlights for this one, which is why the stripes look lighter in some places. I only thinned the stripes a tiny bit because tbh they are pretty much as thin as they could be and I did them the exact same way I did them on her other images. There's also no blurred linerart...

White on the legs still needs to be switched 13:49, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Can you define cheek stripes a bit more? They seem really defined on the rogue

Re-uploaded

CBA? <span style="">21:40, 5/15/2017

Rocky (W) - CBA
Idk. 23:01, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Where the fur tuft drapes over on the chest, there's a little bit of brown waste. Do you need a red-circle? 23:34, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No, I think I got where you're talking about, but if not tell me. 23:44, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail 16:42, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
 * Yup, you got it :) 00:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:05, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

could you make the white on the tail a bit whiter? not sure if it's my eyes but it looks a bit orange. 01:42, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Stripes look denser and more sharp and I'm not sure there should be white on <- back paw because in both other images the white is shown on the other side of the paw, and I think the white bands on the tail should be a bit thinner

Re-uploaded. I tried, hope this is a little better. 14:44, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? he's sho coot <span style="">21:41, 5/15/2017

Hopekit (Ki) - For Approval
I know the shading needs to be fixed and I'll get to that in a bit I just wanted to get this up 23:28, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

reups "fixed" shading. It's still bad but oh well. 23:42, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

darn I wanted this image Smooth out that little chest/belly shading?

reups heck sorry 23:53, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define stripes, unless I'm stupid and blind and they're not stripes? me 2 --

How would I do that though? They're the same color as the star, should I sharpen them? 00:47, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

on the star, the stripes seem to be um... thicker? maybe that would help. holy #@##$ this is super cute

Okay, I know you must've colorpicked, but this seems paler from the Star, unless it's my eyes again xD <span style="">04:20, 5/13/2017

Unfortunately, I disagree with you. The base color seems the same, it's just the tint that looks different.

I'm gonna reup soon, I lost this file and recovered an older version so I'm redoing the shading, but, yes, Broken I colorpicked from the most unshaded untouched spot I could find on the back. If this continues to be a problem, I'll try and get the star's file from Shrikestep 14:18, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups 14:33, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the stripes that are under the shading, as they seem to fade away a bit in shape

reups 15:03, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups waste and the belly shading was bothering me 18:04, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Mosspaw (SC)(App) ~ For Approval
I wanted the set so here you go. I like this one :) <span style="">04:00, 5/13/2017

Could you lighten the shading? It looks really dark compared to his other images. Branchwing (talk) 14:16, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The tail splotch should be further down the tail --> way, because as we can see on the star, it's supposed to be roughly halfway down

Re-uploaded! Not sure if the shading lightening changes show, but I did lighten it just a few ticks. Also, the brown patch being half-way down was done rather sloppily, so let me know if I should change it/anything <span style="">19:11, 5/13/2017

I still think it should be shifted further. I compared the upload histories and I can barely see a difference - it should be just so the edge of the --> side of it hits the middle of the tail, which is about... 7-12 is pixels further (which does make a decent difference on these blanks, imo).

Re-uploaded! It doesn't seem to match the Star, which came first in the set, anymore imo <span style="">20:11, 5/13/2017

Could you lighten the shading a little more and smooth the tail shading a little bit? Branchwing (talk) 21:52, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! How much more do you want it lightened??? I can't keep lightening it because you think it looks too dark for your liking? It won't be visible, or the shading depth will have to be defined if I go on lightening it :/ Sorry if I came off rude, but it really doesn't make sense why I have to keep lightening it and lightening it. <span style="">22:26, 5/13/2017

It looks fine now. Branchwing, the shading tint, darkness, etc never needs to match from one image to the next. Anyhow, perhaps define eye depth and the shading on the farthest front paw? 22:41, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I can't really define the shading on the front brown paw considering it's a dark color as is, so dark shading might not be visible as well as the rest of the image <span style="">23:13, 5/13/2017

It's ok, I just don't like really dark shading (or black), because then it looks bad and awkward to me. It might have been the way my computer screen was positioned to me that was making me think it looked really dark, I apologize. The shading is fine to me now, and thanks for informing me, Danny. I am still a kit in this project, after all. Anyways, could you smooth the shading near the chest, close to the front leg closest to us a little bit? Branchwing (talk) 23:34, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The big brown splotch on the main body looks like it's right above the smaller two splotches on the star image, and could you also add some shading to <- ear? It looks really flat atm

Re-uploaded! Well, it's at a different angle, and the blank is a little bigger then the Star, and personally, I don't think it has to match 100000%, but if I do have to shift the smaller patches closer to the patch on the face, let me know. <span style="">01:20, 5/14/2017

Broken, you need to calm down a bit. Being in a bad mood gives you no justification for snapping at people or being cross. I actually agree with Branchwing; the shading could stand to be lightened a bit; it looks like they has darker spots where the shading is.

Hmm I might be being picky here and I'm sorry if that's the case but I think the splotches I was talking about before would actually be on the back, and wouldn't be super visible from this angle

Could you redline which patches you're talking about? You only described them as two smaller patches, but um, there's kinda patches everywhere on the cat <span style="">02:13, 5/14/2017

http://vvcap.com/s8DIAUlKhmv Sorry about that!

The patch on the > front leg should extend further up to the elbow. :) 04:02, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! When you think you know your own images but really you don't <span style="">04:21, 5/14/2017

maybe you should've reworded that a little, as that came off as rude to me. You've kinda been really hostile lately and it needs to stop :/ Add more shading under the neck <span style="">21:42, 5/15/2017

Bloomheart (E) - CBA
04:57, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth 14:16, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I know it's probably the stripes and all, but it looks like there's an eyelash on his eye. Very nice^ <span style="">23:21, 5/13/2017

Yeah there are no eyelashes

Re-uploaded 04:54, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the patch of light on the back is intentional so I'm just gonna CBA this <span style="">21:43, 5/15/2017

Spotted Fur (W) - For Approval
Failed at matching my own pattern again 19:25, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading? Unless that's part of the pattern :P This is very beautiful Sziri! Your images never fail to amaze me :) <span style="">19:42, 5/14/2017

Re-ups Ohh,thank you 20:41, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw farthest from us? I really like this one Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:43, May 14, 2017 (UTC)chat

Maybe smooth the shading on both the front paws actually^ <span style="">20:50, 5/14/2017

Pine Needle (W) - For Approval
I really like his name ^^ 08:09 15 May 2017

Define the light a little more on the back paw farthest from us, the tail, and smooth the earpink a little more? nice job! <span style="">21:44, 5/15/2017

Juniper Branch (W) ~ For Approval
a simpler one 18:54, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define light on the tail? It looks wholly coated in shadow. --

Not really? You can see the light on > side of the tail because of the pattern <span style="">21:28, 5/15/2017