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Mousefur (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
She was shown to be a light brown in The Darkest Hour, so Comments? 13:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Lighten it up and blur the shadin. Skt Like a baws  13:38, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color a bit more. 15:10, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

A lot more actually. This is in no way light, it's the same color as her main image. Also desaturate the earpink and thicken the shading on her neck/shoulder. 15:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png.

Reuploaded 20:24, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Nice, Moonshine<3 Blur the earpink and shading a bit and rename it File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png Just take away one .png. 20:29, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just a tip from an old coot. ;) I advise, with lighter cats, adding a second layer of shading where the shadows would be darkest, like at the base of her tail, back of her head, behind her front legs, etc. It gives the charart a more three-dimensional look and feel that might help out a bit. 20:37, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I changed the heading, since Mousefur already has an alt warrior. This is the second alt.

This should be called File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png. No need for the extra .png. Blur the earpink and shrink it. 00:01, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 06:20, 31, 05, 2012

Define the neck and haunch shading. 08:26, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" on the face and tail. 05:45 Sat Jun 2

Shrink the ear pink and make it more triangular.

Moon was having issues, so I uploaded for her. 18:11, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, blur it, and center it in the ear. 19:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:31, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, it's very sharp-edged. 22:27, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. 21:40, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Now they are ;) 22:28, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. It looks a little too close to the bottom of the ear.

Still working on this? Skt Spoilers... 22:32, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Rowan helped a lot. 19:55, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and there's some...darker color around the earpink. Also, make the earpink less...pink. 18:41, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:13, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think I'll CBA this since it's been sitting here for a little bit without a comment. 19:27, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but that ear pink still bothers me a bit. It needs to be blurred a bit more. Other than that, the rest of the image is fine. ^^; This next part is //totally optional//, but could you define the shading just a tad?

I think there's waste on the edge of the image. 19:36 Tue Jun 12

Reuploaded I blurred the earpink to the max. if I blur it anymore, it'll look weird. 20:04, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, make it more triangular, maybe that should help a little, I'm not going to tell you to blur it more. 20:08, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

There also still seems to be some darker color around the earpink; please fix that. 22:53, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the brown just slightly less golden, and get rid of the blurred lineart on the ear. 22:33, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this?

Yes, Reuploaded 01:51, June 17, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Can you lighten her up a bit, since this is ment to be light brown, it doesn't really seem like that to my eyes. 03:48, 17, 06, 2012

There's a few pixels of waste a bit in front of her chest. 09:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt.W) ~ For Approval
-Found one like a baws- pity it had to be Hawkn00b.....comments? c: Skt Spoilers... 00:47, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading and the "highlights" edges a bit, imho? 06:42, 15, 06, 2012

Nevermind, wrong version. >.< Epic baws, this time define the shading a bit. 06:45, 15, 06, 2012

Doesn't this need scars?-- 11:03, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Since the scars were revealed in Fading Echoes, I'd say no, as this was in Midnight. Skt Spoilers... 13:36, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the midriff shading a bit. o3o It's looking sort of pure black there. 06:17, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I uh, redid it since I was a derp and forgot to make a xcf...-whistles- Skt Spoilers... 06:57, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit.

Blur the shoulder shading a bit. ouo 10:01, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Nightstar (E) - For Approval
Comments? 00:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Enlarge the lighter area on the haunch, and blur the shading on the face a tiny bit. Lighten the shading a smidge, too, as I can barely see the lineart. 00:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I can't really tell the light source, you might want to redo the shading. 03:38, 17, 06, 2012

Blur the earpink a bit, and maybe add more depth to the shading - it looks pretty flat right now. 09:43, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow(Alt.W2) ~ For Approval
In the SkyClan's Destiny manga, at the time of her warrior ceremony, she was depicted with stripes on her legs and head. Comments? 02:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit larger and blur it. Also, possibly add more stripes to her haunch and/or make the stripes a bit longer so it matches a bit more compared to the apprentice. 02:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink and blur the stripes just a tad. 02:42, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:46, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. 02:47, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

They are for me. Make the ear-pink a tad smaller, it looks like it's about to fall out of the ear, and center it more. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 03:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the leg stripes a tad. 03:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:25, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I believe this is ment to be based off the alt apprentice, right? If so make the haunch stripes go up the haunch more and add more. Good work Ducksplash, I believe this would be 80% complete, imho. 03:28, 17, 06, 2012

Blur the leg stripes a bit more, and I think (just my opinion) that they could be just a bit higher up on the haunch. 09:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear pink ouo 12:36, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. 12:37, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Storm, the pelt isn't required to be smudged into the earpink on the warrior blanks. 12:39, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpaw(heart) alt. ~ For Approval


She broke her leg in Dark River, but she doesn't have a charart for it. So, comments?

♫Feather nose♫ ♥Safe and Sound♥ 13:14, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

She doesn't need this. Her leg got better~ 13:14, June 17, 2012 (UTC)