Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Darktail (Lo) - Tweaked
i have reappeared from my hiatus temporarily to make this and i am very very very rusty so please forgive me 23:50, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

It doesn't look like that one spot on the back of his leg goes down that far on the other images? 23:57, 7/22/2017 it's a different side, doesn't matter 23:59, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

That seemed a little rude to me, please take into consideration anothers feelings before being so blunt k? 00:01, 7/23/2017

I was just stating a fact, I didn't intend to be rude. I don't see how that comes across as rude, but okay 00:04, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

The intent for this pattern was that it was only supposed to be a small amount. Could you shrink that leg patch that Winter is talking about? This is too much black and contradicts the pattern that David has set for him. Also, since this is yours, could you smooth out the shading on the stomach?

Reuploaded 14:43, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Why did you darken the shading? It was fine as it was before 14:50, 7/23/2017

if one's got the file and wants to alter it I won't really bregrudge them, but now it's too dark and he looks grey. 15:53, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

can u also smooth the shading out everywhere? 20:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yup, if someone has the file, then there's really no issues here... and since I'd already asked Cinder to modify the shading, I think it was appropriate that she also fix anything else she found fault with.

Turtle Tail (Star) - Redone
a choir can be heard in the background as she looks ten times better than she did before. also OA is me. The patches are meant to be along her back, and I'm pretty sure that's mostly what this blank shows.

Could you smudge the patches a bit more? :) I love this, and am happy you finally got your wish of redoing her! 05:01, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

May I ask why I need to smudge the patches a bit more? There are many images on here that have them less smudged, and we used to have images that weren't smudged at all.

I don't think every patch has to be smudged, actually, only a few places where it looks a bit sharp. I made a redline, but you don't have to do all of them. https://imgur.com/gallery/T49xU It isn't too major and I just thought it might help. :D 05:13, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Sorreltail's StarClan image has even sharper patches than mine does, though. Also, as for the <- leg, that's actually the lineart... not part of the pattern. It cuts off like that intentionally. I'd much rather not smudge these, as we have plenty of images that are just like this.

Alright, it's fine then! :) 05:16, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Ok I'll try to keep this as short as possible, there are a few little things I noticed and I made a picture comparing the kit, queen, and star where I circled the things http://vvcap.com/tc1kMzu7VrI on the star there is orange near <- ear and it kind of looks like it's on the forehead a lil too but on the other images the orange is only on the ear. Then on -> side of the face on the queen and kit there's some black that comes out almost to the eye but on the star it's much further from the eye. Also on the kit I think it could be smoothed a lil near the end. Then on the star's -> front paw there's black but on the kit it's just white. And on <- front paw of kit there's some black but on the star and queen it's white. On -> side of <- front leg of the star there's some orange and on kit and queen there's no orange. Also we see splotches on -> side of the star's chest but there's nothing on the kit in that spot

Ok sorry that wasn't very short, and I'm sure some of these could just be different angles and such so I don't expect you to fix all of these but I thought I would point out what I thought were inconsistencies. (BTW this was for all three images but I decided to just make one long comment rather than small ones on each image)

These images are not going to match 100% you're being really really picky here Snow. If they're in relatively the same spot it's honestly fine 20:22, 7/23/2017

^seconding for the pattern issues snow brought up :c i mean its nice that ur giving critique but i think its unnecessary 20:25, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Ok maybe some are too picky but we've tweaked really tiny things before like color of eartips not matching and toe color not matching so I think some of the things I mentioned above could be fixed now rather than possibly having to be tweaked later

I mean honestly, I think it's super damn picky and PCA needs to kinda stop the excessive nominations... but there are a couple things I do agree on, and while I might not address all of your "issues" (they aren't issues and imo I consider that highly offensive), I'll at least take care of a couple of them.

I agree that PCA is getting a bit picky, and I think it stems from the fact there are few chararts left to do so people take their time looking for more problems with images to fix. I hope this wasn't offensive, I am just observing. Sorry if this should be on a talk page and not here. 22:01, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Oh btw, Snowfall. I'm not tweaking anything in terms of the pattern on this one. This is meant to be the master pattern, not the other images. I'll edit the other two, but not this one.

Turtle Tail (Queen) - Redone
original OA is Hawky, redone by me. All colors from the Star, and since this mainly shows a belly view, I would think the patches along the back are meant to be smaller.

Same as above :) 05:02, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

As I just replied, there are plenty of images that have sharper patches or other areas, so I'd rather not smudge these. The effect is intentional.

Re-uploaded.

Skystar (Star) - Tweaked
For torn ear 09:42, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Thunderstar (Star) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for shading and light definition. OA's were Mistypebble, and Sorrel & Shinx with a tweak 12:54, 7/23/2017

Define the shading on the tail and <-- ear? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 15:20, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

reup 16:02, 7/23/2017

Storm (Ro) (Alt Star) ~ Redone
Skye said I could redo this, proof is here. OA is skye, tweaked to remove stripes.

Can you smooth out the shading a little? 14:37, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Might just blur it.

Imo this looks more black than dark gray.

^ seconding 20:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

I did in fact say so, yes. Also, smooth out the shading and define it on the tail.