Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Rosetail (E) ~ Redone
Redone for multiple reasons, OA be either Scar or Mounty. Comments? Bbun (talk) 23:51, February 22, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

She's looking more golden brown than light ginger - fix that? Also define the shading some. 11:56 Sat Feb 23

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 15:44, February 23, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

She looks very flat, shading-wise. Add some more depth to it. 16:04, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 16:19, February 23, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

I would suggest making the stripes more ginger-y, they look a bit funny coloured. 22:29, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 22:58, February 23, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading on the chest.

Rosetail (W) ~ Redone
same as elder 01:09, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Make it match the elder more. Bbun (talk) 15:46, February 23, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading some? 20:00, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Darkstar (SC) (L) ~ Tweaked
Okay, so, the OA is Beebs. ouo I goofed around with the base, as well as the shading. I also tried something else...how about this? Look better?

Try and make the black darker, so it looks more like black fur rather than shading, and smudge it a bit to also add to that effect? 01:57, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes might not be showing. Look here.

Sedgecreek (W) - Redone
I liked the reddish color of the old one so I decided to go off of that. If it's too red I'll tweak it. Redone for realism. Yay braided tabbies. 05:31, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Uhh, a bit too ginger here. Really pretty, but brown it up a bit. 21:22, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:27, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Still looks... well, it looks like a torbie. She's just cited as brown tabby, nothing else. And the only brown is in the stripes. Now she's blue-grey and orange. 05:05, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

She's not? All of her colors are browns and she looks plenty brown on both of my computers. Her shading is a very dark blue, but that's no different than, say, Heavystep. 05:10, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

I call it as I see it. She still looks ginger and blue-grey and very, very pale to me. She just needs to be brown. I applaud your creativity, I really do, but this strays way too far from her cited description. 00:21, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

I don't see anything close to a torbie, however I do agree that the tinting could be tweaked a bit. It's just a tad much and it's throwing off the color to much. Tinting's good, but too much causes issues. Maybe desaturate it a bit more, or move it closer to purple rather than blue. 01:23, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Scourge (R) - Tweaked
Tweaked to make black darker. OA was Oblivion. And my gimp is being stupid with this image, and the changes are only showing in the thumbnail image. Since I have no clue what it's doing I'm just going to give it a bit to see if it fixes itself. 02:44, 02/24/2013

...He's not darker at all - he's a hell of a lot light o.o 02:45 Sun Feb 24

He looks darker in the file history...o.o Re-upload again, Shimmer.

Both the wiki and gimp is spazzing.... I have /no/ clue what's up, I've never seen that happen. o.o Er... give it a little while I guess? I thought you said it was just gimp, didn't realize it was the wiki too. We'll see what happens... 02:48, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yey~ Paleh figured out what was wrong with it. 03:47, 02/24/2013

Whee~ That was the strangest thing I'd seen in a while. 0_o While this is up for tweak anyways, can you lighten the white paw and add a bit of shading on it? Also, could you change the nose color to match the kit? 04:04, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:27, 02/24/2013

Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
Eh, not so happy with this. Might scrap him and redo him again, or at least the shading. 04:44, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

I know it's just cause of the shading, but since the shading covers almost every bit of white, it looks quite gray. Any chance of you changing the light source so the white doesn't look so gray? 05:06, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA be Scar and I got the file from her. Needed to be darker.