Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Flametail ~ Silver Nomination
I am nominating Falmetail becasue he looks good enough to be silver! Comments?

~Brackenfur66~ 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66~Brackenfur66~ 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mean Flametail? His second quote doesn't show his personality; you might want to find a better one. also, expand Night whispers, and Fading echoes. 22:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Outcast, Sunrise, The Fourth Apprentice, and Sign of the Moon. I'm sure there's better quotes somewhere else. 23:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

No promblem. Just give me a week.

P.S. my siggie isn't ready yet sorry

~Brackenfur66~

Are you still working on this? 23:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yep still workin.

☺Brackenfur66☺ 02:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66☺Brackenfur66☺ 02:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetbriar ~ Silver Nomination
I tried to expand as much history as possible. Comments? 07:04, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a quote of Bluekit mentioning her? (sorry, new here >.<) Mi  st  y!  07:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes add all the quotes that relate to her (I think there's two: the one mentioned above and the one where Pinestar is talking about his first battle.) Also, see if you can smooth out the first paragraph of BP. 10:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done everything. 06:37, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good! I would skim through Bluestar's Prophecy to make sure that you mentioned every time she was in the books. Also, Mistypebble; Don't be afraid to express your opinion. ;) 06:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The first paragraph of her article is very terse and choppy so I would make it flow better. 14:03, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Also fixed up some references. 06:41, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? 02:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

It probably is there just haven't been any critiques. Looks good, Robintalon. This will be CBVed when more votes close. 18:21, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay cool 05:14, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to put this up for vote momentarily as this has had no critiques since the 3rd. 01:15, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Waspwhisker ~ Silver Nomination
I've been working on his article for a while, and I added on to a bit of SkyClan's Destiny and The Rescue. Comments? Mi st  y!  07:28, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I know he only appears a few times, but is it possible to add more detail to both sections? Also, add some quotes. :) 02:39, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Added onto SkyClan's Destiny, but I couldn't find anything else in The Rescue.. I also added two quotes. (Is it okay for them to be on the same page?) Mi  st  y!  04:25, August 30, 2011 (UTC) Anything else? Mi st  y!  19:18, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another good quote? Also, the main quote doesn't tell much about his personality. Give it more background/detailed description. Say something like Waspwhisker after getting injured in battle, or whatever it was. 22:22, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get on that as soon as I can. ;) Mi  st  y!  00:21, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Finished, anything else? Mi st  y!  19:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks brilliant! You only need 3 quotes in the quote section, and it doesn't tell much about him, so I deleted it for you. This can be CBVed once votes end. :) 22:06, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! :3 Sorry 'bout that didn't know about the quote thing xD Mi  st  y!  03:10, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Its okay. This is on the CBV list. 00:04, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to put this up for vote as this has had no critiques since the 3rd. 01:15, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mudpuddle - Silver Nomination
Yeah he's really minor, so there wasn't much that could be done. I gave him the only quote he has and expanded his history a little bit. Comments? 21:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think he can be expanded any more, so this can be CBVed once more votes are over. 22:41, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The vote will be put up momentarily. 01:15, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt ~ Silver Nomination
So, I added as much history as I could, searching up her name in the book, so I'm sure that's all she's mentioned. I also added all her quotes, and I'm sure the family is complete. 00:36, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. I see nothing wrong, though you mind want to remove the trivia about her not being mentioned in the allegiances. In Bluestar's Prophecy, ThunderClan was the main Clan. The other Clans were like dust and beetles, WindClan didn't get all their cats mentioned, though I'm sure of it when they get their own super edition. 18:30, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, done. 23:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once a lot more votes end. 00:50, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to put this up for vote as no critiques have been posted since the 31st of August. 02:25, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
She's very minor. Comments? Swee tflo  wer   02:03, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Currently you have four nominations up when you're only allowed three. This will be closed until one of your nominations close. 03:01, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Where is my third? The Honeypaw (SC) ~ Bronze doesn't count. Does it? Besides you don't nominate them for bronze so where is my third? Swee tflo  wer   18:01, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oi, french has fried my brain. Anyways, sorry, miscounted. :P Can you expand the article anymore? Or add quotes? 00:48, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lawls, it's ok, it happens to me, except not with french, anyways, done ;)  Swee  tflo  wer   20:15, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

If there is any way that you can go into more elaborate detail about what Honeypaw has done, then go ahead, otherwise I don't know what else you could do. But since s/he is going to appear in two more books and we know little about the character, shouldn't we wait? 22:06, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add 2 more quotes? 22:18, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy Me either @Misty I can't add anymore quotes, she has no more. Swee tflo  wer   23:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

While the series isn't complete, doesn't mean that this nomination has to wait. If the article's in that bad of condition long after the series has ended, we can always have a discussion about demoting it. Otherwise, looks good, Sweetflower! 23:53, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Atelda, and by the way, even if there are future books, it's just like Squirrelflight or Dovewing they'll appear in more books, even though they both (probably) have been nominated silver (or gold)! Swee tflo  wer   20:11, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand The Rescue? I thought Honeypaw was one of the cats who were "kittypets" who got food from Twolegs? I'm not sure, since I don't have the book, but it is mentioned on Sandypaw's page. 22:14, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Done :)  Swee  tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think!   20:42, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! It looks a lot better. I'll add it to the CBV list. 22:03, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Could you provide a page number for the main quote as well as try to rephrase it without using, "S/he is first seen..." or "S/he is mentioned..." because its a bit unprofessional. 22:07, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good point. I fixed the S/he things, since there was only two, but I can't help with the quote. Since this is mainly ready, lets keep it on the CBV list, and add the number asap. 22:24, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Done :D  Swee  tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think! 21:02, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nettlepad - Silver Nomination
Comments? 14:24, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have any more good quotes? If not, then it looks good. ;3 01:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. 17:15, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

On the list. 19:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Domino ~ Silver Nomination
I added quotes and expanded his article, so comments? :3 01:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Any more quotes? If not, don't fret. :) 22:37, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It says that Domino is Fleck's kin, I don't have the book handy so maybe if you can find a citation and add it in to his charcat, and you could just list him as "kin" since it could mean brother, father, nephew, ect. 22:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Its page 83-84. 23:27, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done, I even added another quote. Thanks Mistystar. :) 02:03, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't get mad, but I added the family page and citations and stuff, but I think I messed it up ;-; I looked at the coding and everything and it still isn't right. Oh well, if you know what you're doing then the stuff's there, just fix my mistake I guess xD I tried helping! 01:15, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm not at all mad. I fixed the coding and such in the Family section. ;) 18:21, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I put it on the list. :) 19:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Piper ~ Silver Nomination
She has the only quote relating to her, and I expanded the history. 23:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. She is very minor and only appears in Crookedstar's Promise so there's not really anything to add. 02:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I added the alive templates and the family tree. Thats it, I think. 00:29, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

On the list. 23:25, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rock (Healer) ~ Silver Nominaion
I see nothing wrong with him. He looks ready. Any suggestions? 00:01, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you expand Outcast some more? Other than, it looks great! ^^ 19:52, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

All expanded :) 21:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also expand or add more detail too Long Shadows. It seems very choppy and concise. 00:47, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

All set. Sorry about the late reply my cpu crashed and I am currently at the library. Anything for the Wiki :) 17:40, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find another quote? If not, supporting. 00:02, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

All set :) 20:05, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Am I done? 20:48, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Be patient. ;D I checked it over, fixed a few punctuation mistakes, and it looks ready. I'll add it to the CBV list. 22:10, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't shoot me, but is it possible for you to extend the Secrets of the Clans and Cats of the Clans section? I mean, he is the narrator of the latter, so there should be a little more to elaborate on. =) 15:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Logfur ~ Silver Nomination
I shall add the quotes later. :P Besides that, his history looks great! Comments? 14:27, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Added the quotes in! Anything else? 21:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? 00:30, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

There aren't any other quotes. I checked my copy of Code of the Clans and there aren't anymore quotes. 11:42, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then this will be CBVed once more votes end. Great work! 22:01, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteberry - Silver Nomination
A very minor character. Well, comments? 19:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whos's Whiteberry? xD jk. This looks great! 21:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add as the quote where he is sharing tongues at the gathering? And if any more sentences mention him, use them as his quotes. 02:15, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, but I remember in CP, Oakheart, I think, said that the elders (including him) were chatting away. In Chapter 20, I think, he is mentioned. Add that. 00:34, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try to find it. 19:22, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Erm.. I don't have CP.. Sorry xD 21:15, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you use harpercollins or something? I don't have it right now either. 22:44, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done! :D 23:49, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Any comments? xD Sorry, I'm impatient. 20:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Do we need to put "it is assumed he died"? No offense, that sounds a little unprofessional. Although I can't think of anything better to put.... (x.x;;) 00:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he doesn't appear in any other books after that… ~Snowdazzle (not signed in :l)

Its okay to say that its assumed that he died, we did that on a lot of other articles. But, could you add the history and quote that Oakheart says that the elders would chat the night away if they could or something? It doesn't actually mention him, but he is talking about the group of elders that Whiteberry is in. 22:05, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the'' 'onlys In the text. Such as he is only seen when ......  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER The Peace is Perfect☯  06:15, September 22, 2011 (UTC)''

Mist (Lo) ~ Silver Nomination
Okay, I expanded, added another paragraph, and added a quote. Comments? 22:34, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Add some more quotes. 22:52, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I can't. Thats the only quote that shows his personality. I just realized that I forgot the family tree, so I'm working on that. 22:53, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I went and added in the family list for you, but, I can't provide the references at the moment. You'll need to do that. 22:54, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I made a family tree and all the alive templates for them and completed it. 00:27, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The history can be expanded. If I managed to milk out what I did with Magpie, you can with Mist. (=P) 00:53, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Magpie coughs, so you have a lot more to expand. I seriously added every detail about Mist without copying the text exactly, and I don't have the book, so I can't add anything. 01:15, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

What does coughing have to do with anything? lol. Maybe if I get bored, I'll see if there's anything to expand on, since I have the book with me. 01:19, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, coughing gives you a lot to write about... xD thanks. 01:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

I just looked. Wow. There isn't anything more to expand on. Talk about really minor. 01:27, September 20, 2011 (UTC) '

On the CBV list. 21:43, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Silverhawk - Silver Nomination
Considering he's such a minor character, I think his article has enough information to have a silver grade. 17:04, September 10, 2011 (UTC) Perhaps flesh out the beginning of Crookedstar's Promise some? It looks great, Icy :D 21:36, September 12, 2011 (UTC) Also, add more quotes. In CP, he does say a few more good sentences that can be used. 22:26, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on this as soon as I'm un-lazy enough to get out of my comfy covers and go to my room to get CP. <3 22:43, September 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Updated: Comments? 23:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand the first paragraph of CP? Add in more details. 21:55, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanclaw ~ Silver Nomination
Well, there wasn't much to add, he isn't really a major character. I did check this time to make sure he wasn't already graded. :P Comments? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 21:09, September 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can Outcast or Sunset be expanded? This also needs a main quote and another quote for the quote section. 22:03, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Flesh out Eclipse. 22:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC) Will do, whenever I have time. :p Shadewing ' Blades of the Night  02:14, September 13, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Okay, I added a bit to Eclipse, but there was nothing else on him. I checked the whole book. Nothing. Same goes for Sunset. I'll get around to Outcast and quotes as soon as possible. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:45, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright, expanded Outcast, added a main quote. I'll try to get some more quotes. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:27, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I added more quotes. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:18, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Wonderful! This will be CBVed once more votes end. 23:44, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Frostfur ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? Swee tflo  wer  00:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Bluestar's Prophecy, Rising Storm, Forest of Secrets, A Dangerous Path, and The Darkest Hour. Sorry if I sound picky. 10:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

See if you can find one or two more quotes for her. 19:46, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Done ;) I fleshed it out, she didn't appear in many, but I did expand Dawn xD  Swee  tflo  wer      23:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)  Can you find one more good quote? Characters should have at least 3 quotes in their quote sections.  00:01, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

There are four quotes there already?! Swee tflo  wer   20:46, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't see it; I thought there were 2. xD So, add descriptions for the quotes. 22:00, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

xD That's fine :D Done ;)  Swee  tflo  wer  I'm sweeter than you think!      21:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)  Move the quote section to beneath the family tree. 93.97.191.4 15:23, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, forgot to sign in. 15:29, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I feel the need to help out random users with nominations. Sweet, I moved the quote section for you. I do believe they go at the bottom of the page. ;) I'll also fix up the interwiki linking, 'cause I'm nice like that. 15:32, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Cloudskye! Your sure are nice like that xD  Swee  tflo  wer  I'm sweeter than you think! 17:38, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Just 'cause I'm not part of PC anymore, doesn't mean I can't help out. I just don't have the patience to nominate character articles. No offense to anyone here. =) 17:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This article looks good. I'll add it to the CBV list now. 21:42, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! Thanks :)  Swee  tflo  wer  I'm sweeter than you think!     22:30, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lark ~ Silver Nomination
I'm still expanding the history and finding quotes. 11:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, if you find more quotes, a better main quote could be chosen. Besides that, I think it's fine.

There's a no reservation rule, right? xD Its okay, the page looks pretty complete. So, add a quote section, since I'm sure she has a lot of quotes in SotM. 22:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

She does. :P I just added them in. Anything else? 00:07, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add more detail to the last paragraph? It's a bit concise. 15:12, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I added detail to the whole page. :P Anything else? 03:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I deleted two of the quotes, since you should only have 3 in the quote section, and those two didn't show her personality. I see nothing wrong with the article, so I'll add it to the list. :D 21:38, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower - Silver Nomination
Aahhhh... the thrill of nominating again. :) I went through her article, and expanded history where I could, and found some good quotes. I will still look for some more, but for the time, being it looks fine. 23:12, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! If you can find more quotes, great, but if not, then thats good. Can the last sentence of Dawn be expanded? Does Morningflower say anything to show that she is satisfied? Sorry, but I don't have the book, so I can't check. 22:11, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Its been over a week. Are you still working on this? 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Violet ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? Swee tflo  wer  I'm sweeter than you think! 01:49, September 17, 2011 (UTC) Can you expand Heart of a Warrior by mentioning what she did in the dream as well as go more in depth with Cats of the Clans? It's a bit brief. Also could you provide more to the last quote? It can be a bit confusing. :) 01:59, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't own wither of those books xD To the library! Would you wind helping if you own one of the two? Swee tflo  wer  I'm sweeter than you think! 17:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, sure. I'll do Cats of the Clans since I neither own nor read the mangas. 23:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowstar - Silver Nomination
Comments? 22:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add a transition to where it says that s/he supports Darkstar's new addition to the warrior code? Since I don't have the book, does it explain or hint why her/his eye's look troubled. If not, don't worry about it. :) 23:38, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add a quote? It does say that s/he says that there was a fox or something... 01:17, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ottersplash ~ Silver Nomination
I understand she wasn't on the concerns list, but she needed work. Comments? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 23:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good job! Add a few more quotes - I'm going to add one, since I have CP on me right now. Crookedstar's Promise should be expanded, and maybe flesh out Battles of the Clans? Also, is there any trivia? 23:34, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'll have to look. I don't own CP or Battles of the Clans, I'll have to rent it, but I think I'm buying CP soon. As for trivia and all, I'll try to find some... Shadewing  Blades of the Night 23:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing 

Also, add in some of the links ;3 23:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fleshed out Battle of the Clans. I will get to CP, quotes, and links soon. x3 Shadewing  Blades of the Night  00:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Quotes have been added, onto links. I won't be able to do CP until I get the book, which I think I'm getting it next week. Unless I can rent it. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:40, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can the beginning of both Bluestar's Prophecy, and Crookedstar's Promise both flow better? The ending of Crookedstar's Promise was ended a bit abrubtly. Nice work. 01:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you can add the descriptions to the quotes? It just says who said it, and that isn't enough to tell us about her personality. 01:20, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

I will do both of those things asap. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 01:33, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Fixed up Bluestar's Prophecy. I ordered CP, and I should have it soon. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:28, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Great, just fix CP, and this can be CBVed once more votes end. You can also use HarperCollins for minor things.. 22:32, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for doing this. I was working on this orginally, but I just couldn't get CP. I have a great quote, but I don't know what page it's on... ><  YatzSliversword     Defender of Sacred Grove  22:48, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. Keep it up!

No problem, Yatz. I'l try HarperCollins, Mistystar, but I'm not sure I'll find much... Shadewing  Blades of the Night 01:08, September 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Quotes
Hi, world! Should quotes be in chronological order? They tend to be rather disorganized. I'd be happy to work on organizing some if it's needed. Rubytail 23:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I don't think it matters, however, your free to do so. Other opinions? 00:42, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, it doesn't matter. They're just quotes to show the character's personality, and its not the same as the history. 20:54, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Magpie ~ Silver Nomination
Considering I've done both his chararts, I've taken quite a liking to him. He's quite a minor character, so I don't think there's much more that can be added. I'm looking for quotes now. 16:53, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I've expanded the article about as much as I can, fixed the references for the family and added four quotes - one main and three others. 19:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good, Skye! Hm, is there any trivia? And maybe add a few links. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:42, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I added links for all character that were mentioned, and everything that I could. There isn't any trivia, either. 00:48, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. It looks wonderful. =) Shadewing  Blades of the Night  00:58, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Why thank you. This is the first character article I've worked on in quite a long time. Well, aside from some minor details, but that's about it. 00:59, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to lead into the article a bit better? Also, could you incoperate the moonstone/foodstone more? No worries if you can't. 01:05, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The Moonstone/Foodstone thing is about a paragraph long, so I didn't have much to work with. I tried to redo that first sentence, and what's up now is what I could come up with. 01:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll add it to the CBV list. 21:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) ~ Silver Nomination
Her article looks awesome. I also added in a main quote, and a another quote for the bottom. I am doing her loner charart too, which makes it even better. xD Anyways, comments? 02:48, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add 2 more quotes to the quote section? 01:05, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I added one more right now, but I'll add another when I'm back on Friday. 14:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Done. ''' 16:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Unbold Mitzi's name in the main quote, it looks kinda weird that way, Sorry if i sound picky. 18:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

may i join?
may i join PC 'cause i woudn't mind editing articals of characters and adding info thank you

-Blackfur

P.S. kitsufox told me to join a project i don edit main alot

Blackfur ufufufufufufu &gt;=3 22:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! Welcome to PC! Read the fAQ for any questions. 01:01, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Moonleaf - Join Request
I guess I'm ready for this. Time to come out of the box and ask this... may I join the project? 00:13, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! Welcome to PC! I'll add you in. read the FAQ for any questions. 00:50, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome Moonleaf:)!  Swee  tflo  wer  I'm sweeter than you think!      01:02, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nightmask - Silver Nomination
I chose an easy one because I just joined. Anyways, there wasn't much to add, I just added a sentence. And I think he is ready (wow, nominating an article THIS early). Comments? 01:37, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add a quote section and/or a main quote if possible. 01:43, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, done. I hope that quote works. 01:55, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more quotes? Also add descrpitions to the quotes. 20:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he only ever had two quotes in the entire series, and that other one (besides the one already on his page) doesn't really show his personality. I'm not sure what you mean by "descriptions" to the quotes. 21:18, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then never mind about finding more quotes, and for the descriptions, I meant, for the quote section quote, you might say something like "Nightmask questioning the ThunderClan visitors", or something to tell what the quote is about. 21:21, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Done. 21:30, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful job. I'll add it to the CBV list. 21:33, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oatwhisker ~ Silver Nomination
His page looks complete. Comments? 11:55, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

If you're talking about the ThunderClan Oatwhisker, wonderful job. I see nothing wrong. 17:24, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? Yes, this is the ThunderClan one, since the WindClan one is already silver. 21:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the flow of the article is a bit choppy. And I think that the last quote would fit better as the main quote, but it's nominators choice. 21:53, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are there anymore links that can be added? Also, I agree with Atelda about the quote. However, it's your choice. 02:04, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Petalkit (LC) ~ Silver Nomination
Another minor character. I figure I'll do smaller ones until I get back into the gist of things. So, comments? 22:53, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes you could add? 00:34, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

None at all. The main quote and the other one are actually the same thing. I just broke it up so it would look better. 00:42, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly add a narrator quote, then? 01:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Done. There aren't any other quotes I can add to the article, not even narrator ones. 01:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

May I join?
Umm Hi can I join? I'm still pretty new and don't know a lot but its time to come out my shell. I guess.Laynabug 02:19, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add you in momentarily. Please look at the FAQ. Welcome to the project. 02:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Atelda! I will look at that thank you again. :) Laynabug 02:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Splash When Fish Leaps ~ Silver Nomination
Comments?  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sign of the Moon seems like it's just listing out the appearences/mentions Splash had in the book. Connect many of the short sentences together as they're quite abridged. As well as adding transitions and paragraph breaks where needed. 15:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Atelda. Also, find another quote if possible. The main quote shouldn't be repeated in the "Quotes" section. Redundancy doesn't look good. =P 15:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC)