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Broken Shadow (Q) - Redone
Took colors from her sharpclaw, but the pattern is screaming triangle tabby to me. I'd love to redo them both for pattern. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 02:18, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the belly "highlight" round-er... :3 02:30, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah...both of them are total triangle tabbies....anyway, define the shoulder highlight a smidge. 03:14, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the "highlights" on the legs. 23:47, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some. 18:08, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:30, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly blur the shading a tad. (Mostly the belly and haunch) 19:43, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe widen the belly "highlight" a smidge. 07:40, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Q) ~ Tweaked
Well, even though it's listed as a redo, all I really did was slap on some more shading. I'll do a total redo if needed, but...*shrugs*. 09:56, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I think a total redo would be good, so long as you keep the same style. The shading's pretty blotchy. 13:57, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made some adjustments, but the pattern's the same for the most part. 22:06, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Can you blur the stomach shading? 22:08, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading. Skt Like a baws  22:13, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:15, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading. o3o 01:35, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:12, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly "highlight" and/or blur the shading. It looks a bit flat. 15:28, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ew highlights. x.x 22:47, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the belly. Breeze whisker  01:51, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) ~ Redone
The reasons are on the nomination page. -lazy- OAs be Mosswisker&Stealthfire with a tweak by Silver. Skt Like a baws 00:59, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blah, his nose... xP Define the shading 83  01:38, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like to think he licks it up. 8D Skt Like a baws  01:51, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading and blur the earpink. <3 -- jack  never let go,   diane ❤''' 18:24, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt Like a baws  00:29, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Morningstar (L)- Tweaked
OA was the ever talented and dearly missed Night Shine. He was nominated for shading issues. I realize that there is waste, I'm gonna go ahead and take care of that now. When you don't see waste on the left sde (his right) then you'll know I've taken care of it. 04:13, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the chest and tail shading a bit? ^^  15:01, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the haunch shading a bit. <3 16:22, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like he's missing a pixel on his right eye. 22:48, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Morningstar's description isn't accurate. Someone used an image from BotC, but we don't know it's him... sorry, guys.

Poppyfrost (W)~ Tweaked


She needed shading to be defined, and i blurred the bottom of her ear-pink a bit, it wasn'ts as blurred as the rest, and there was a transparent thing on her tail, so i fixed that to. OA was sandstar12, with a redo by Iceheart22. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 07:08, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define it a ton more. I can still barely see it. 15:26, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Upload this over the original file; don't create another. 15:56, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better, Paleh? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:36, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

No.... it still needs to be defined more. And reupload over the old file. 23:06, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

This still isn't the right file name. And her far back paw's shading is too dark. 23:07, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I did, i found the old file(The one that was redone by Iceheart) and and darkened that shading. Let me check.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:14, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well then replace the image up top with that one  23:18, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

-Shakes head- Appernetly, i didn't even though i went to Iceheart's page, and saved it...huh. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:19, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Let's try this again. Renamed the file(Again), darkened shading more, and lightened her back foot. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:26, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading on the neck and behind the shoulder. Breeze whisker  01:51, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Maple...... the image on her page. This is not the right one. Just upload over the file that's already on her page. It's not that hard. =.= 04:45, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

I've changed the image to the right one. Now upload over the one up there^ 19:09, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I've saved the one you put up there, Loon, it doesn't work this time, because, this is the same name file i keep using, i'm withdrawing, this isn't worth the headache. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:45, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over.

Re-uploaded.

This type of tortie is a pain in the butt to make the shading /visible/ on (I tried), I suggest either adding or brightening the highlights, cause the darkness you'd need the shading at would make everything look gray. 22:03, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Lichenfur (E) ~ Tweaked
Needed an under bite =3 Comments? 12:59, May 28, 2012 (UTC) Forgot to fix the jaw.. I'll fix that soon. 15:06, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe give the tooth some shading (for lack of a better word) by darkening the two bottom pixels on the tooth? ^^;; 15:36, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

That's not really an underbite. Her lower jaw should be sticking out, like her loner. 00:10, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know, that's why I said I would fix the jaw up there o3o I failed Dx  21:39, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Her chin looks a little flat, could you curve it? 23:06, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Move the tooth forward. Cuspids aren't that far back in the mouth. Breeze whisker  01:49, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (E) - Tweaked
She needed to be darker (finally)... OA was Hawktalon. 23:01, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad... possibly. 03:02, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. If anyone else disagrees, I will. 21:18, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Darken the base pelt color just a tad to match a bit more. :3 06:11, 30, 05, 2012

Graypool (Ki) - Tweaked
Graykit. ouo Tweaked to make darker...The latest OA was Misty, but there was also Cinder, Pantherstorm, and Brightheart345. Comments? owo  ☾    T    w    e    e    ☽   Cannonsinthedistance~ 23:40, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe just a liiiittle darker? 01:59, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it a leeetle too? 21:25, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (K) ~ Redone
Redone because her kit image's stripes/coloring etc just didn't match her other images. Also, should I know the OA when its a redo? 03:21, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 03:31, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded x.x sorry, trying to match the color more to the other images. -- 03:35, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading. Darken it? Breeze whisker  04:00, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Should be able to see the shading now X3 -- 04:48, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 07:26, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Found something I needed to fix. -- 11:23, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little more. 21:35, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded took the earpink straight from the warrior, and I defined it more. -- 00:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Give the base pelt color and possibly stripes a tiny bit more of a pinkish tinge to match more. 06:15, 30, 05, 2012

Re-uploaded -- 07:27, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face and side of her body. Skt Like a baws  11:29, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (W) ~ Tweaked
OMG YESH I've been wanting to kill his shading forever! OA was me and Leafstrike added the pale paws. I redid the shading (copied and pasted Leopardstar's shading and recolored it red) to make him more gold and less brown. I added a pale chest to go with the pale paws better but I can take it out, Stone agreed to changing the kit. 04:38 Tue May 29

The shading kinda makes the stripes blend together. Maybe put it on a multiply layer type, if you don't already? Breeze whisker  04:47, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Epic <3 Could make the earpink a bit less neon? It could be my lap top though. -- 04:51, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried x.x 04:57 Tue May 29

Define the shading and lighten the stripes. 14:16, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, but yes, define the shading. And blur the earpink a bit, and maybe make it less purpley-gray and more red. 14:41, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:00 Wed May 30

Robinwing (TC) (W) ~ Tweaked
Shading tweak, as well as other tiny little things I noticed while working on the image. OA of the most recent version is me.

Define the shading. 22:43, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Dappletail (E) - Redone
I think this looks like a tortoiseshell. These are harder than I though. XP Anyway, redone to look dappled. I dunno, would a more calico style cat fit the description better? Breeze whisker  00:39, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Dang it you're too good at these *dies* Maybe enlarge the earpink a whee bit more? So beautiful *.* 01:16 Wed May 30

Reuploaded. Thanks Mounty. <33 Breeze  whisker  01:47, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the patches? So much better than mine Skt Like a baws   01:58, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I assumed you meant the tortoiseshell markings. Breeze whisker  16:10, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart (D) ~ Redone
Shellheart! I wish he didn't die a slow death. D8 Anyways, it needed to be redone due to shading issues and needed to match his deputy a bit more. Comments for improvement? 00:58, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his bottom a bit more? Breeze whisker  01:48, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

This is too dark  03:23, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Runningbrook (a) - Redone
Check the talk page for discussion. Ew this image, can't match Icey's epicness. Comments. -.- 07:08, 30, 05, 2012

Poppyfrost (Ki) ~ Tweaked
My first ever tweak! OA was Iceheart. Defined the shading. 07:44, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some more. 07:54, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Done 08:30, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the earpink a bit. 203.158.38.104 (DJ)

Done 13:35, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest and top of the heck a tad, and smooth it out. Breeze whisker  16:06, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Heck. XDD I meant head. Breeze whisker  23:53, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Barley (Ki) - Redone
See the tweak nomination page for reasons caaaause.... I'm lazy. XD OA was Mistystar. All colors are from his loner (I have the layers still) so no changing that. Comments? 14:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and erase some from his face. Breeze whisker  16:05, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:25, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the white is too dark and all the shading needs blurred more  16:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rain (Alt. E) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for shading issues. 20:50, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'highlights' on the haunch more. 21:38, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh shading a bit :3 21:53, May 30, 2012 (UTC)