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Smudge (KP) - Withdrawn
nobody has him up plus i really wanted to do him so please don't decline this! Echopaw 15:09, January

16, 2010 (UTC)

He looks nothing like his picture in Cats of the Clans.Look at that for a refrence.And theres no need for ear pink on the farthest ear.Also,it's to dark and looks more like a acute triangle,amke it alittle smaller and blur it. ''' ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ    Have a happy Valentineღ |undefined 22 15:16, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't matter whether you really wanted to do him or not, Shruggy (Brambleclaw14) has him on his current projects. I am going to decline this, sorry. People 'reserve characters because they really want to do them, and if you want to put characters up either add them to your own list before anyone else does, or discuss it with the person who has it reserved before you post. Declined for said reasons.
 * Note: nobody has him up because the blanks have been approved not 5 minutes ago.

Also - approval has an 'a' not an 'e' ;) Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  15:32, January 16, 2010 (UTC)


 * Sandy Echopaw can do him. the thing I use for making then isn't working (nothing is working :[ ) Brambleclaw14 Talk 15:48, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, back up for approval. Sorry to hear that Shruggy. Echo - just remember for next time Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  15:55, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the patches looks odd to me, or is it supposed to be like that?-- Moss I'm Up There!  19:03, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty good, but i think it could use some more shading, and also, blur the patches a lot. The edges look rough now. ☛ ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ ☚ 19:40, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, that's not exactly fair. I reserved him, and I thought nobody can take your reservation. Plus: I did him earlier, see? I thought I did a good job too. :( Swiftpelt 19:51, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

When you reserved him Brambleclaw14 had him first.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleclaw's reservation wasn't on there before the new Character thing. When I put it up there, nobody had it. Oh well.... :'( Swiftpelt How's the prey running? 19:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Shruggy definitely had him first because I checked when I removed him from your current projects. Sorry Swiftpelt. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  20:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Echopaw,he looks nothing like his image in cats of the clans.In it,he's a black cat with small white spots on various places.Look in that book for a refrence once again. ''' ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ    Have a happy Valentineღ |undefined 22 22:29, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

FirePelt: Give him/her a chance - it's only been a couple of hours; you can't expect everyone to edit an image that quickly. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  22:30, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I know,but still.For some reason I get paranoid on things like this.I want them to be as accurate as possible.Also,his eyes are supposed to be amber. ''' ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ    Have a happy Valentineღ |undefined 22 22:33, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

thanks sandy and im a she! Echopaw 22:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, and Cats of the Clans it terribly inaccurate in some images. I never pictured Smudge like he was portrayed in that book. But our chararts don't really have to look like their images in Cats of the Clans. Take Heathertail for example. She looks nothing like she's supposed to in Cats of the clans, she's orange with purply eyes. But her charart was done beautifully, the way she was described in the book. So, I don't think that should be an issue -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:51, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Unfortunately, Smudge's base color is black. I guess you can replace the white with black, and the black with white.-- Quail! Jack in the Box 23:20, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well wait a minute, we don't know that. There are so many mistakes in that book that we can't be sure. I think it's fine if we just keep it white with black patches.-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:27, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think we need to go on written evidence as we cannot be sure the pictures are entirely correct seeing as they were an artist's own impression of the characters and not Erin Hunter's own work. As long as the image fits the book descriptions we have of him, I think it'll be okay Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  11:26, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, as for the image. The eyes do need to be amber, as that's been cited from the book. The ear pink looks too purple, make it more reddish like this -- Bone -- Blur the patches more, and add some more shading to the head -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:08, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED sorry well here he is Echopaw 22:51, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The patches and earpink need to be blurred more.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:08, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED here is he any better? Echopaw 14:57, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Right now it looks like there's lineart around the patches, it needs to be blended between the black and white to be a gray-ish color. For examples, look at Patchpelt, Mousewhisker, Toadstep, Crowfrost, Cloudspots, Smoky, Floss, Fritz, or Splash. --  Icy -chan   ★  15:56, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echopaw 16:35, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

The patches still need to be blurred a lot, and so does the ear pink. Also, there needs to be ear pink on his right ear also -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:51, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

No NIght, that ear is turned away from us. Blur the shading on his head. Icestorm Hi There! 18:20, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be a lot smaller, so it fits inside the ear. Blur as well, like Night says, on all the shading. Bramble -sama  02:08, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded Echopaw 21:01, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is still purple. Look at Splash to get the right color, and then really blur it. Also, the shading on his head still needs to be blurred a lot. -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:29, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any better! Echopaw 23:26, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Swiftpelt i took down your smudge cause it was really confusing me! Echopaw 00:39, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still looks very purple to me, and the shading needs blending ∑✐+ᖱ =  ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ  11:56, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echopaw 13:44, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. Also lighten the shading on his head. The ear pink looks very purple. Perhaps make it like Whitestorm. Icestorm Hi There! 01:16, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the ear looks really purple. Does anyone else agree? Maybe you should try and change the colour completely? You could also make the pink (purple) ear smaller? Fawnstorm 19:32, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink, and blue the shading, not that it's really needed. Apart from that, you're good to go! Birchy 17:32, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined ∑✐+ᖱ =  ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ  10:56, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Uhh School work hard! so hard! ganna die! any ways here he is! the first part explains every thing;) style="font-family:Papyrus;border:2px solid; color:darkgreen;"> echo paw  13:50, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Now the earpink is too bright. Try getting the color from another black cat since the ear is black.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:20, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echopaw 16:43, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still looks really weird.....maybe shrink it and then blur some more.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:40, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:40, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echopaw 19:57, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks a tad too purple.--Shaf Girl  20:47, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's still way to purple. It's way to big, and it doesn't even look like you blurred, just smudged it a lot. Look at an approved kittypet for an example on how to do the ear pink. - Jigsaw, Seville, Princess-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:46, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Well most of it is the shading Echopaw 00:20, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

You shouldn't shade part of the earpink. Either shade that side of the face or leave it a single color. try looking at some other Kittypets.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:56, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow is right, and I think you should completely redo the ear pink. It looks smudged, not blurred. It needs to be smaller, and it's way to purple-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:14, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED any better? i tried my best! Echopaw 00:30, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit big. -- Angel Paw  00:32, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's very bright pink. Make it darker and more discreet-- M I  N  N  O  W  C  L  A  W  00:03, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

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The earpink is still way to big. Look at Jigsaw-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:21, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look strange, maybe make them bigger.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 17:48, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Stupid ear pink!!! some one help me with the ear pink! EcHoPaW   17:43, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I've done the ear pink for you.

I feel really bad saying this but the shading and highlights are a complete mess as soon as you blow it up a few hundred times. I did my best to blend them a little for you... Also, most of the lineart is blurred and some is missing. I think you may be better starting over on this. ∑✐+ᖱ = ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ  20:06, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy thank you and i redid the whole thing. EcHoPaW   21:48, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

You need to color his nose and the shading on the white parts of him is too dark.-- Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:16, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add nose color.--  Night shine   ♥  02:55, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Does Smudge need the disc on his collar coloured in? I wasn't sure if it was necessary, only the other kittypets had coloured collor discs. I think it needs colouring in. Really good! :D Mistyheart 16:35, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Im coming with all this! EcHoPaW   21:13, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

hh i want to withdraw this i want to do diesel. EcHoPaW   00:17, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving, then. Bramble 01:49, February 10, 2010 (UTC)