Warriors Wiki talk:Books/Discussion Archive 25

Tigerclaw's Fury - Silver Nomination
This is for the allegiances, gallery, and main article. It's a vital e-book and I love detail. .o. So, I'd uh, rather not shorten it.

It looks great to me. Keep Up the good work. 20:06, April 12, 2014 (UTC)

Any other comments?

CBV? No one's said anything and it's been a fair bit, so I think I could do this.

The Sun Trail/Chapter 4 ~ Silver Nomination
Hadn't done one of these in a while. Comments? 23:08, April 17, 2014 (UTC)

The first paragraph seems to be worded a little bit awkwardly - maybe you could try and make it flow a little better? 05:12, April 18, 2014 (UTC)

How this? 15:33, April 18, 2014 (UTC)

Just double check for spelling/grammar. Looks good! 04:12, April 28, 2014 (UTC)

Just looked, and I couldn't find anything o3o 00:44, April 29, 2014 (UTC)

CBV? 03:25, May 10, 2014 (UTC)

Rising Storm/Chapter 2 - Silver Nomination
Comments? 00:50, April 21, 2014 (UTC)

Stick in a comma or semicolon somewhere in the first sentence so it doesn't sound as choppy, maybe? 05:15, May 1, 2014 (UTC)

This better? I reworded some of the other sentences as well. 13:10, May 1, 2014 (UTC)

CBV?

Night Whispers/Chapter 4 - Silver Nomination
I'm finding a few of these I did a while back and never nominated so yeah 21:37 Tue Apr 22

Can you check the tense in the fourth paragraph? 22:21, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Could you go through and fix the spelling/grammar errors? 05:03, April 24, 2014 (UTC)

Fixed, and patched it up a bit. 23:56 Fri Apr 25

CBV? 03:25, May 10, 2014 (UTC)