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Morningflower (Q) - Declined
eh.i didn't have much to work with in terms of matching the stomach. 18:02, 07/21/2014

Blur the patches a bit. They're not as hard-edges on her other images and they're smoother, for lack of a better work.

reuploaded also i added shading on the shoulder because i forgot it 19:13, 07/21/2014

Define the shading on the chest and darken it a bit.

'reuploaded ok i'm really proud of this 02:38, 07/22/2014

Define the shoulder shading a little bit. I know it's there, but I can't really see it.

reuploaded 18:52, 07/26/2014

Blur the feet shading.

They look fine to me. 22:55 Wed Jul 30 2014

Maybe blur just a little? 1:50 AM, Thu Jul 31, 2014

Declined as requested via Skype message.

Mapleshade (A) - Declined
ew. im not totally happy with this. but. here it is. 21:48, 07/21/2014

the spiky fur on her back looks a bit out of place, perhaps remove a few of the spikes. 21:53, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine to be honest. It takes away from the look that she is actually ragged... I'd rather not remove it unless more people agree. 22:21, 07/21/2014

I gotta agree with Duck. Maybe if they went up the back a little more? They kinda..just stop when they probably should continue up the spine..

Maybe look at the other Mapleshade apprentice image to get an idea about how to do the spikes? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:27, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:06, 07/21/2014

Her muzzle and chest look really gray.

The light is coming from her bum, so it will look that grey... I don't see how I can lighten it without being told to define it again. :/ 13:46, 07/25/2014

It is still very possible to lighten the shading and have it visible. I can see it just fine, but it's making the white look too gray right now. I'm not telling you to make it at like 0% opacity or anything, just enough so I don't have to squint to tell it's honestly white.

reuploaded 20:08, 07/26/2014

I'm sorry, I know it must be frustrating but the shading is lost on me. Also, to keep the muzzle, chest, or whatever looking whiter, just erase that part of the shading with the eraser at a low opacity. 01:26, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Her fur is sticking up more like she's frightened or angry then ragged or spikey or whatever her description is I can't remember. The lineart for the fur should be less uniform and there should be bigger and smaller clumps and they wouldn't all stick directly vertical.

That's what I did, 'Teldy. I'm assuming you mean to define it elsewhere based on the fact that it's 'lost' on you? As for Breezey; thanks I'll try to smooth them out. This is my first time doing ragged fur so I have no idea what I'm doing lol. 23:26, 07/30/2014

Declined as requested via Skype message.

Speckle (Q) - For Approval
Who am I to deny the needy? (in need of a new blank, that is...) 23:42 Sat Jul 26

Define and add depth the shading, and I think the flecks disappear under it a bit. 23:45, July 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I blurred the shading more and lowered the opacity on both layers to about 68... but I'm not sure about defining it/darkening it because I don't know how to get the flecks to not disappear on her belly. which sucks because I really want to darken that shading up more. 23:51 Sat Jul 26

Darken, define, and expand the shading, and sharpen the flecks some. 00:20, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. 00:30 Sun Jul 27

Some of the flecks still get lost in her belly/cheek/lower tail shading. 00:04, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

You can always tint the shading more towards a black or alternative color that's not as similar to her pelt color. And darken, define, and expand the shading some more too. 01:15, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

If you're going to use a color that does stay close to her base, then you could use the "multiply" layer option as another alternative. That should decrease the amount of flecks that appear to fade away. =)

re-up. I did pure black shading like Alteda suggested, and I set the layers on Multiply. The opacities for the three layers are 59, 59, and 13, and I Gaussian blurred 8 times, then 4, then 2. Thanks guys. <span style="">13:31 Mon Jul 28

Sharpen the flecks - notice how on the loner, they are much sharper. 18:12, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">6:20 PM, Wed Jul 30, 2014

Try making the flecks less pronounced and more furry to match the loner. Maybe lighten them a bit? And smudge/blur them. <span style="">22:51 Wed Jul 30 2014

Re-up. <span style="">2:54 PM, Thu Jul 31, 2014

On her loner image, she has smaller, darker flecks around he larger ones, so I guess... Try varying them in size and darkness? Brick  21:32, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Ehhh, I tried. <span style="">2:53 PM, Fri Aug 1, 2014

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140802C/ezimba17991021006000.png <span style="">2:54 PM, Fri Aug 1, 2014

Blur the smaller, sharper speckles just a tiny bit. A gaussian blur of 1 should do it. <span style="">23:35 Sun Aug 3

re-ups. <span style="">11:29 PM, Tue Aug 5, 2014

Floss(Q) - For Approval
21:07, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. darn I was gonna nab her! she's preeeeety tho c; <span style="">10:26 PM, Mon Jul 28, 2014

re-uploaded thanks! 19:19, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Try to expand and smooth the shading a bit. <span style="">22:46 Wed Jul 30 2014

re-uploaded redid the shading 18:05, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face and ---> leg a bit more? <span style="">6:32 PM, Thu Jul 31, 2014

The white looks really gray on the tail to the point I seriously can't tell it's white.

re-uploaded 17:14, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Newtspeck (Q) - For Approval
Thought I'd try her pattern, it looked fun. Here are the changes if they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140729C/ezimba13931897571600.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:42, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

This is pretty :3 Define the shading a tad. 15:23, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Defined, and the ginger parts were lightened. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:55, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

I think this pattern is being tweaked to make her a tabby or something like that? 17:50, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Oh, wow, it is. Alright. Should I take this down until the tweak is done or something? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:42, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think since the tweak/retweak thing passed... Jayie, you can make a pattern for this. The apprentice and warrior need to be tweaked to be a more appropriate style matching her description, and I wouldn't complain letting you go ahead and decide what to do with her images, since you already have one up.

Edited to fit the new pattern, though I'm not sure I like the shading on this at the moment. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:34, August 5, 2014 (UTC)

Dawncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
Boom. All colors colorpicked from the elder that Jayie has for approval. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:06, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on her belly a bit (I know it's artist's choice but it seems a little too dark), and I don't think her stripes really match the other images, but that might just be me 20:04, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I can't do anything with the stripes. I copied from the elder best I could. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:26, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

It could just be me, but the base coat looks a little light. <span style="">10:21 PM, Tue Jul 29, 2014

I think it's because of the highlights. Maybe dull them some? Wow... *o* <span style="">22:26 Tue Jul 29

the stripes don't match, possible add more. 01:07, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too thin, and there should be striping on the head. I think the highlighting might be a little too bright as well compared to the other Dawncloud images, but that might be up to artist preference, not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:10, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled the highlights, thickened the stripes, and lightened the face shading so you could see the face stripes. I matched the stripes the best I could, and spent about two hours on them. I even pasted the Elder on another layer to use as reference. Queens' bellies are stretched, so so is the pattern, to be fair. (And Duck, adding more stripes probably won't make it match more, because she never had more stripes then this in the first place) Pls don't kill me  <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy  Blitz  and  Melody  09:08, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Does she have texture, or is that just the way you've done the shading? 11:35, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

It's shading. I smudged rather then blurred. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:05, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, if you look at her StarClanner, she does have more stripes than this facing this way, adding more, would make it match more. 17:47, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. OK, Shinx confirmed for derp. Added some more stripes, although I don't have room for any more. If someone complains, I'll just redo them. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:37, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit its desaturating her colors. <span style="">22:45 Wed Jul 30 2014

There's waste under the belly and on the front leg farthest to us. Brick  09:33, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:58, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 19:11, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Snowbird (Q) - For Approval
Duck withdrew his and she hasn't been approved yet, so why not torture myself with another long hair queen? 10 points to whoever can answer the above question  <span style="">9:41 PM, Tue Jul 29, 2014

It's being picky, but the shading is receding on the bottom of the belly as well as the bottem of the foreleg that's farthest from us. 01:22, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Did I get it all? <span style="">6:14 PM, Wed Jul 30, 2014

Define the light on the legs. Nicely done~ White cats can sometimes be a pain the tush.

Re-up. Thanks :) <span style="">2:59 PM, Thu Jul 31, 2014

Blur the shading on the tail and belly.

Re-up. <span style="">3:37 PM, Sat Aug 2, 2014

Lighten the shading a little; a slide on the opacity bar of 7 or so should do the trick. <span style="">18:44 Sun Aug 3

Re-up. Thanks. <span style="">11:32 PM, Tue Aug 5, 2014

Sunfish (Q) - For Approval
fish fish fish fish fish >(,·) 17:24, July 30, 2014 (UTC)\

dull the earpink a bit? fish fish fishy fish fish <span style="">6:10 PM, Wed Jul 30, 2014

>)))),·) 19:19, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The leg shading is a bit flat... <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:38, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

><((("> 23:06, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out her leg and chest shading, and define the light on her legs 13:25, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

<º)))>< 21:08, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
let's see if I can get this approved by august 7th (holiday c:)! Comments? Changes are here 23:38, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reups changes 13:07, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading looks blotchy on some areas of the belly and hind leg that's lifted. <span style="">23:32 Sun Aug 3

Reups 00:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Wind (Q) ~ For Approval
ehhh, comments? 02:24, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Very nice shading on the face. :) Maybe have a bit more shadow on the >>>> side of her belly, and have some highlight on her chest. This looks really good. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:40, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

The chest wouldn't have any light hitting it at this position, so I think it's fine, as well as the belly, since it's trying to make the belly look round and all o3o 17:05, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

thin out the cheekbone shadow, unless she has some really really defined cheekbones it wouldn't be that big 19:13, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

She could have some really defined ones or not - why should we assume? I think it's fine because of said reason. (ahh i hope this doesn't come off as laziness because it's not) 19:15, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think it would hurt to do what Duck suggested. I saw it at first and thought it was unblurred/unsmudged shading. And it kinda is coming off as laziness, dear. =P

re-up 20:50, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Brackenwing (Q) ~ For Approval
Hmm... Hawky thinks she did a pretty a good job. <span style="">16:12 Sat Aug 2

Define the facial shading? O.O rocket agrees <span style="">4:21 PM, Sat Aug 2, 2014

Re-uploaded. Thank you. c: <span style="">16:25 Sat Aug 2

Oakfur (Alt. A) - For Approval
bleh… 20:45, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I can't tall where the light source is. The head, tail, and three of the legs suggest it's from the back, the chest and front leg furthest from us suggest from the front, and the back suggests from the top? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody

Re-uploaded Jet-lagged Scar really shouldn't be shading cats… 17:29, August 3, 2014 (UTC)


 * They are 21:49, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think changes are showing...??? <span style="">17:26 Mon Aug 4

Sorry but when I compare both images they look the same. (To me, anyway... It could just be that wikia is being a butt). <span style="">21:52 Mon Aug 4

Mapleshade (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
Here we go again. Comments? 15:51, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Defien the neck shading a tad? <span style="">17:26 Sun Aug 3

re-up 17:33, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Q) - Declined
Heh, I was eager to post this. I may... Not definetley, but I may have started work on this before River (Ki) even got past CBA. I saw she needed a redone queen image and I knew, knew, that it was destiny. Or, y'know, maybe this'll get declined and it won't be destiny, who knows?

Brick 16:02, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but this will be declined, as Squirrelflight's queen image is for her not being pregnant. 16:05, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (Ki) - For Approval
Pulled all colors and opacities from the apprentice. comments? 17:10, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws. He's cute! <span style="">21:20 Sun Aug 3

Re-uploaded Thanks~ c: 21:57, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q) ~ For Approval
Believe it or not this took an hour of my life to make. I got all colors from the StarClanner and reference of the pattern from the loner. <span style="">18:40 Sun Aug 3

Changes. <span style="">18:41 Sun Aug 3

Can you define the earpink a little? She's lovely 00:18, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I color picked from her other images, so I'd rather not. Thank you, though! <span style="">0:30 Mon Aug 4

Actually, I agree with Sorrel. I'm having a really hard time seeing it in -> ear, so maybe shift the layers around? <span style="">12:04 AM, Tue Aug 5, 2014

Re-uploaded. <span style="">4:08 Tue Aug 5

Thorn (Alt. Ro 2) ~ For Approval
She was described with Dew's description and gender, and according the the characters needing art page, that warrants an alt? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  11:55, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

I believe the file should be named Thorn.rogue.alt2.png. Also, some of the bits of fur sticking up going along the spine, the lines on them look a little bit thinner than they should, could you just add a few pixels to them so they match the rest of the lines? Brick 14:35, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Would you like Dew's lineart? You may use it if you wish. <span style="">17:24 Mon Aug 4

Yes please, Hawkie. ^_^ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  19:17, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Here you go! <span style="">20:16 Mon Aug 4

TY, I'll re-upload ASAP. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  20:57, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Snowkit (Star) - For Approval
Vicky said he went to StarClan. ouo

Define the chest shading a tad. He went to StarClan? Now what am I gonna do with my fanfic? Brick  17:46, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded'.

Dew (Alt Ro) - For Approval
Figured I'd try a rogue blank. Dew was described with Thorn's description at one point, so that warranted an alt. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:29, August 5, 2014 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Star) - For Approval
Rumble rumble Brick   12:57, August 5, 2014 (UTC)