Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 11

Jumpfoot - Approved
This is Jumpfoot. Comments? Hawkfire My Den 16:58, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

The eye looks deformed, the ear pink looks like anime, and there's a big black scratch mark on the back. G B 57 17:36, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

The shadows and highlights look well placed, they just need to be blended a lot. Try to make it look as smooth as you can without completely smudging the color. --♫ insaneular ♫ 17:58, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Blend. The ear pink and the shading both need blending.  Sandy Talk! 18:00, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I will blend. And mess with the ear. The "Black scratch mark" is his muscle, he is a muscular tom. Hawkfire My Den 02:39, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

You can take that out. We can't really show that he's muscular. Showing him as a black tom with green eyes will suffice. -- Bramble My Realm 18:50, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Better? I blended shading and messed with ear. I also took out the muscle. Is that all? Hawkfire My Den 19:20, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

I think this is the best one you've done, Hawkey. :) You just need to make his ear pink more this color: and more triangular. That's all I can see off the top my head. -- Bramble My Realm 21:52, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? I fixed the ear. Hawkfire My Den

Because he's a black cat try making the ear pink smaller. It's exactly the right colour, only it is too big. On a black cat it is not so visible. Almost there Hawkfire  Sandy Talk! 13:50, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Better Sandy? Hawkfire My Den 18:33, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

Better but it still needs to be a little smaller.  Sandy Talk! 08:26, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? I smallered (lol) the ear. :) blended a little more too. Hawkfire My Den 01:55, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Better :) This looks really nice Hawkey. Any more comments before approval in 24 hours?  Sandy Talk! 09:59, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

The ear colour is still a bit... dodgy... -- Dawnfeather talk! 13:47, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Its supposed to look like that, Dawn :) I think it looks fine, maybe it's just your computer. All comps are different Hawkfire My Den 02:16, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

I think I know what Dawn means. It looks like you put red on it and dodged it a couple times. You could make it more pink-ish. ;)--Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 18:38, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the ear. Can he be approved now? Hawkfire My Den 01:59, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

No becuase the color is too dark. Use this:Minnowclaw 16:12, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

That color is too light for a black cat.

Okay I fixed the ear. And also, the color is supposed to be a lot lighter than pure black so that we can see the line art Hawkfire My Den 18:25, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

I am such a nut I forgot to sign and didn't finish the post. I meant to say the ear color; it needs to be dark pink, because that looks like a wad of gum is stuck to his ear. Keep it inside the lineart, and make it more triangular. Copy it like the other approved ears exactly. -- Bramble My Realm 20:56, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hawkfire My Den 02:50, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

It looks like a fluro dark red color. Try a more pink color. What I do is go to a bright hot pink, then go darker and bring the palette a left so it's a touch lighter. Also try to bring it up more and smooth it out because i looks like it's popping out of the ear.--Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 22:28, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

F.Y.I Bramble told me to make it dark pink, and also I am getting real tired of changing the ear pink. Accept the color please. Hawkfire My Den 00:44, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Don't be rude, Hawkey. It does look like it's popping out of the ear. Blur it. A lot. So it looks like it's inside the ear, and not stuck on like a wad of cotton candy. Do the same for your Talltail, and make his a darker pink. As for the color, note that dark pink is not the same as hot pink. -- Bramble My Realm 01:21, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

You need to use the pink Bramble gave you further up this section: <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 08:45, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Sorry for being rude, I am just frustrated. I am way overeacting, and I will fix the ears witha smile on my face. Okay that color pink coming up! Hawkfire My Den 13:05, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Does the ear look better? I made it more triangular and a lighter color. Hawkfire My Den 15:26, 20 July 2009 (UTC)


 * iIt stills looks fluro. If your using pixlr, copy the image adress of the color Bramble and Sandy gave you, use the color picker and click it. Then go back to the image and put that color in it.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 20:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Done Hawkfire My Den 23:56, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments? Hawkfire My Den 21:42, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Make it smaller and blend it in. Look at the pixels for Nightcloud, Whitethroat, Blackclaw to see how the ear should look on black fur. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:30, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Like this? Hawkfire My Den 14:33, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

yay!! We got there eventually! Any more comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:25, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:19, 24 July 2009 (UTC)