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Cow(R) - For Approval
Alright, so unless it says in the books she was named after the apperance of a cow, I'm giving her the apperance of my cat since the last time I did that, the cat's description was magically changed by an author later on, so let's try this pattern again. The eyes are also a warmer green color but if they look too yellow I can tweak them a bit. But yeah, as always, if something's outta place then just tell me! I had fun with this  01:33, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her side just a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 04:42, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge (i assume thats what you did, judging by how it looks) the shading a lot more. I can /see/ the smudge marks... 10:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't smudge on Sai. She has fur texture  04:53, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Either way, I can see strange markings on the main body where I think the shading is meant to be. 13:42, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Yes, I plan on working on her tonight, offline has been kicking my ass  04:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  05:34, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but the white can stand to be smoothed out a little more. It looks sharp on the chest and the shading still looks a tad blotchy. 22:07, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

How/where is it exactly blotchy? 05:36, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

I guess just smooth it out in general

I think the image could be darkened a tad. 21:56, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Just a reminder here to not forget to upload! 02:56, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not, remember that I have obligations outside of the Wiki and I will reupload in the timeframe allotted   04:50, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  07:19, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Hate to break the CBA, but I think the dot on her hind leg can stand to be blurred/smudged a little more. 07:56, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Also, the forepaw closest to us looks kind of gray. 06:13, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

The chest can be smudged and the shading could be msoothed out some more. 13:50, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the white should be smudged/blurred more, if you don't mind. 20:26 Thu Nov 26

I've already stated this, but I cannot smudge on Sai  08:58, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, maybe blur it then? Or use a different program? Or smooth it out in a different way, like add some on the edges on a lower opacity? 21:32 Fri Nov 27

I honestly think it's fine, and you guys are being way too picky. There is nothing wrong with having the white how it is; smudging isn't even mandatory on any image.

I agree it looks fine honestly. And iveh if you need help smudging in SAI i csn help c: 21:43, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Ok but even if the white was agreed to look fine, the part where the shading needs to be smoothed out is still not addressed. 02:25, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

And it still can be blurred. 05:51, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Why does it need to be blurred? If he blurs the shading, then you guys will start saying it's too flat and force him to define it. This shading is no different from shading on other images, and I really don't see any issues with it.

Reuploaded  19:09, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Because it looks really sharp and a tad blotchy. I still think it should be smoothed out a small bit more. 15:28, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink looks purple. Try color picking from an existing black cat image to get a right color. 09:56, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

I have smoothed out the shading as absolutely as best as I can. I've seen cats on here with incredibly sharp shading and they are fine. If I do it anymore you won't be able to see shading anymore. 00:19, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the front paw socks just a tad. Misty~ (talk) 04:25, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

It already looks blurred enough to me. Darken the shading a smidge along the upper front leg/front shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:51, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Mistpelt (Star) - CBA
tired lil elder cat 03:50 Fri Nov 13

sharpen and expand the shading

I don't think she should sharpen it but she could definitely blur it and expand it a lot. 07:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's like a dot in the far lower left corner? 13:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 02:35 Sat Nov 14

expand the shading everywhere, especially on the tail. Define the light on the legs.

reuploaded. redid shading again. idk if this is good or not 22:41 Tue Nov 17

Comments before approval? 01:01, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading depth could be defined a lot. It's looking a bit flat on the tail and forelegs.

There's a weird streak of pale texture on the tail.. mind fixing that? 21:47, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 03:06, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. redid shading. again. 03:18 Sun Nov 22

Comments before approval? 00:06, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading on the legs is still flat

it's fine. I took a look at her file and that's the best she can get it without having it look even worse. re-CBA? 05:44, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Nope. just because she can't do it, doesn't mean it's fine. please define it, it looks very flat. 04:55, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

that's what i've been trying to do for the past 3 uploads. can you possibly give me a hint on to how to deepen it then? cause nothing i'm doing seems to work. 01:41 Wed Nov 25

Perhaps add a new layer of thinner, darker shading?

I can't see where the light source is. Could you define it? 20:25 Thu Nov 26

reuploaded tried a new light source. 22:51 Fri Nov 27

I'm going to be that person but I seriously still can't see any shading on the face and legs. :x

Define it on the tail too. 09:57, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

reuploaded barely 02:03 Wed Dec 2

CBA?

Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink into the pelt, it looks like it cuts off very abruptly. 23:07, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

I think you could smooth out the shading on the main body and tail more. also, the shading is leaking on the legs. (Remember to blur the edges of the shading only so that it doesn't end up leaking)

The shading is leaking on the chest and where the tail-tip is over the body as well. Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 14:01, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Echosnout (Star) ~ For Approval
The MC is hard to match. 23:33, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white parts a lot, and smudge the earpink a little more. 00:17, Nov. 21, 2015 (UTC)

for some reason the eyes look strange to me... Maybe define the gradient of them?

Reupload I tried moving the pupil's away from the lighter part of the eye. 19:48, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the main body shading a bit? 17:22 Sun Nov 22

Smudge the black a bit more.

Reupload 19:18, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

define your light source on the chest

You mean cover the light spot? It's usually fine with other images, and the light source is coming from the <---. 04:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

if it's coming from <== there, then the leg shading is in the wrong place. Switch it, please.

No, the light source is coming from there. The shading will be ==> that way then. 07:45, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ahh, I see. I thought you meant that the light was hitting <== this way. But that means the chest shading is in the wrong direction. Perhaps flip that around?

I'm sorry I'm still confused. 20:41, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just swap the position of the chest shading around. 23:30, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I think I understand what you mean now. 07:29, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Note quite. This is what I meant for you to do with the chest: http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283593286300.png

Reupload Like that? 19:40, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you get rid of some of the shading on <== side of the chest? Now the whole chest looks shaded, whereas part of the chest on that side should be in light like Fox's image shows. 21:53, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:21, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the white, like on the mc? 20:22 Thu Nov 26

Reupload 20:57, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

define the facial shading

Reupload 00:58, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the black parts of the body. 04:09, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

This is optional, but could you add some shading to the chin? It looks oddly bright. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:56, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 21:52, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

define the facial shading, it looks really flat.

I'm not quite sure where the light source is. Shade along the bottom of the chest? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:53, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Moss Tail (ES) ~ For Approval
Tis who has done terrible tinted shading and shall never do thy again? Tis I has done the job and tis failed terribly. 17:00, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on the overall body?--Dewsplash (talk) 17:12, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is just horrifying 17:31, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading? 17:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

I can't tell if it's the shading or not, but he looks awfully green.

I see red, Maybe change the shading tint to blue of black? 18:00, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up im cring in le inside. 21:49, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

The tail is looking a little bit flat. If the tail's supposed to be in entire shadow, perhaps add some depth to it. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:06, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? 20:20 Thu Nov 26

re-up wait a second, i need to go flip a table   15:22, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:29, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

I can't really see the earpink - mind defining it? 18:43, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the main issue with the shading is that there is very little light on the whole image. Perhaps you could add more of it? I suggest using highlights as well.

Shattered Ice(ES) ~ For Approval
About half of the time I spent of this image was on shading. 15:06 Wed Nov 25

Define the shading on the stomach & tail? Lovely! Sorry about commenting on the shading >3<   15:18, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! 16:45 Wed Nov 25

Expand and define shading i can hardly make it out 17:58, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'll probably be told to lighten it, but whatever. <span style="">3:11 Thu Nov 26

The lightness looks ok to me. But perhaps smooth it out - I can see the smudge lines very, very clearly. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:15, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I swear, I did actually smudge the shading on every layer, even if it looks pretty similar to what it looked like before. <span style="">14:36 Thu Nov 26

dont smudge it all horizontally - smudge it to the direction of the fur flow

It's intended to be smudged in the direction of the fur... Where did I mess up? <span style="">15:28 Fri Nov 27

It does look rather horizontal, instead of flowing into the direction of the fur. 02:21, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried <span style="">3:15 Sat Nov 28

Could you lighten up the facial shading just a tad? ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:55, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How's that? <span style="">23:13 Sun Nov 29

I really like this, so CBA?

Sorry, but I think the shading on the white should be lightened a bit... It looks a bit too dark for this pattern and I actually think the white's looking too gray overall. Are you using pure white or offwhite? If you're using offwhite, I highly suggest using pure white instead.

I colorpicked from the rogue image. It is not pure white, but if I change it, I don't think it'll match. <span style="">20:24 Tue Dec 1

Just because you colorpicked doesn't mean it's right. There are so many different factors- shading, highlights, texture, ect, that could change a color. I actually think the rogue looks too gray, so please change it.

Re-uploaded The lightest color I found on any of his images is F8F8F8, so I used that. If you can find a lighter color on there I will change it again. I also added a blue tint to the shading, which might help it look less gray. <span style="">15:46 Wed Dec 2

Swift Minnow (ES) - CBA
This has faint texture on it, correct? Because my monitor's being weird, and I can't really tell too well. 21:35, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

yes it does but its much more blurred than that. yours tbh kinda looks like she's got visible veins. Also could you smooth out the shading some more? 23:36, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred the texture and shading. Already this image is a nightmare, especially given I can hardly see what I'm doing. What is wrong with my monitor?? 01:10, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

could you blend the arm/hind leg shading a little bit? cute! <span style="">22:38 Fri Nov 27

Re-uploded. 13:31, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading behind her shoulder?

Re-uploaded. 13:24, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. CBA?

I'm sorry, but the texture is much lighter on her other image.. and at first glance, I thought her rogue didn't even have texture to begin with. Can you please lighten it?

Re-uploaded. I lightened the texture quite a bit, should I lighten it more, though? 21:28, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 02:33, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Morning Fire (K) - CBA
My first charart - I'm also not sure if I got the right template, and if I didn't, I'm sorry because I got a little confused on her page. Thanks. Comments? Misty~ (talk) 07:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's dark brown - darken the color please.

Re-uploaded (I think this is how you do it? Sorry, I'm new to all of this...) Misty~ (talk) 07:22, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

that's exactly what I wanted you to do. Darken it some more, and I'll promote you into an apprentice, since you clearly know what you're doing.

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing at the moment though (For me at least). And thanks Misty~ (talk) 01:47, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Morning Fire is such a cool name. Can you make the earpink less neon please? 13:49, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please. Very nice! 14:30, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Misty~ (talk) 03:21, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the color could be darkened. Look at Moss Tail's charart for some reference.

Re-uploaded Is it a bit too dark now..? Misty~ (talk) 05:21, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Again. Changes weren't showing. Misty~ (talk) 10:53, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink, it look way too neon. Perhaps color pick from an existing image?

Re-uploaded Misty~ (talk) 03:41, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the shading a lot more. She seems a little.. green on my screen. 09:27, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't look green to me, but can you lighten the shading a lot? 17:32, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Misty~ (talk) 22:25, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading in between the legs a little more. 23:17, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Misty~ (talk) 23:57, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some light to ==> this ear?

Re-uploaded Misty~ (talk) 04:11, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Slate (Star) ~ For Approval
I love this girl. In case you're wondering, I didn't add the scar as I felt you wouldn't be able to see it from this angle. If someone disagrees, though, I'll add it. 17:04, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry but honestly this cite for her being in starclan is invalid, as kate only says "i think they would be pretty chill in starclan" that does not confirm anything whatsoever that slate is in starclan at the current commented moment. Nor is "think" something that means "yes". 18:05, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't that mean that Slash and friends/One Eye don't get DF images? Because all she said was "yes, those cats would make fabulous Dark Forest cats!", not that they are in the DF. Also, the "yes" was in reply to a "Do you think" comment, not a "Are they in the DF?". <span style="">21:20 Fri Nov 27

Well, given that the "yes" was to the Dark Forest comment, not to Slate, I think it applies. The comment towards Slate said that they'd get along in StarClan, not that Slate died or anything...

Yeah, but the Dark Forest comment was "do you think these cats are in the DF", not "are these cats in the DF". Not that any of that applies to Slate's image. I just feel like the DF "yes" is kinda invalid, considering how the question is phrased. But I am rather new to the wiki and do not know everything that is considered a valid cite, so just ignore this comment if I'm wrong. <span style="">21:29 Fri Nov 27

Uh but it's Kate's answer that is valid, not my question, judging by that, a ton of cites are going to be nullified? And she flat out said "yes" in regards to my question. 02:11, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

But the question was "do you think" and thus yes meant "yes, I think so". I dunno, that's how I interpret it. <span style="">3:17 Sat Nov 28

can you bring this stuff to pc, it doesn't belong here. 05:18, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

If this does stay up, could you define the light on both ears? The pink is very hard to see. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 05:36, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:02, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading on the main part of the body.

Reuploaded. 18:26, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a little? This is really pretty! <span style="">20:26 Tue Dec 1

Reuploaded. Thank you. 20:35, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry to directly contradict the last suggestion you were given, but I honestly can't make out the shading very well (it doesn't help that the base color is already so dark), can you darken/define it a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:56, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:06, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Dew Nose (ES) ~ For Approval
18:41, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Just brighten up the white a tad on the nose and tail? --Dewsplash (talk) 18:46, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad thicker on her kit image.

Reups 18:42, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

could you brighten the white on the tail tip just a little more? Then I think this would be ready for a CBA.

Could you add some shading to the white tail tip. 10:41, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups There already was shading on the tail tip, but I've defined it. 16:41, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:34, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (Star) - For Approval
Bleh, I'll probably redo the shading later. Stoatskip (talk) 19:23, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, that's better. Stoatskip (talk) 20:14, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps try blurring the stipes? Nice. Misty~ (talk) 22:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

could you also add some depth to the shading on the main body? it looks a little flat. the eyes are beautiful, by the way! <span style="">22:36 Fri Nov 27

Thicken the stripes - they look way too thin.

Re-ups Thank you! Stoatskip (talk) 14:33, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think you still need to blur the stripes more. Misty~ (talk) 01:37, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes more tapered.

Re-ups I can't really blur them more than they are now. 15:52, November 29, 2015

You seem to know what you're doing and this looks more than 50% done so I am going to go ahead and promote you to an apprentice. 16:29, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail just a smidge? <span style="">23:05 Sun Nov 29

The stripes seem to be much darker on her other images. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 05:38, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Have you shaded the ear-pink and nose yet? If not, can you please do that? Thanks. If it's not compulsory, then my apologies Misty~ (talk) 05:54, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's not required, I don't think; I didn't do it on my earlier images. Anyway, maybe define the eye depth a little? 01:39, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

can you darken the stripes a little? I think they're darker on the others. 10:01, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (Star) ~ For Approval
good afternoon.

<wails and rolls on the floor> I never got to do an image of (one of) my favorite cat! This is amazing though... define the facial shading a bit more~?

Define the depth of the shading on the paws? This looks nice! o.o ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:53, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

the chest and paws should be white, and even if they are, they look too tinted. 11:20, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks guys <3 The chest and paws are white, I tried to add highlights and erase some of the shading.

could you define the tail shading a tad bit? <span style="">02:32 Wed Dec 2

Re-uploaded Yes.

This is gorgeous! :D Darken the shading a little just along the edge of the belly? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:50, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Micah (k) ~ Withdrawn
Holy damn these blanks are hell .-. 18:35, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the main body a little. Pretty! 18:51, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

I cannot lighten the shading, as it is the same color and darkness of shading as the other images, and I'd rather not get told to define the shading 02:02, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

Well, the thing is, I'm having trouble seeing the stripes through the shading, which is why I asked if you could lighten it. 02:17, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

reups this is as much as i am lightening it 02:52, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

It's still too dark. Try expanding it and blurring it. 09:58, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

Just because it works on one image, doesn't mean it'll work on another. If someone tells you to lighten it, then you probably should do so. Using the same color and darkness from another image isn't going to produce the same results. And personally, I still think it's way too dark.

The back foot seems oddly bright against the shading. If it's still like that after tending to the previous comments then maybe shadow it some? <span style="">02:32 Wed Dec 2

Withdrawing. I can't do kit blanks. Also, the paws are pale, so that might've been why. 13:32, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

May I take over? 14:30, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to ask, just go ahead. 18:43, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Snake (ES) - For Approval
I present one Clear Sky fanboy, at your service. This was actually fairly difficult, as the pale parts are almost entirely in shading.

Juniper Branch (Q) ~ For Approval
09:24, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

How does one even charart. Can you define the shading on the tail? This is gorgeous skt! 13:24, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

reuploded 17:37, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Drizzle (ES) ~ For Approval
Love the name. Hate the texture though. Not sure it matches that well :/ 12:57, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you did pretty well matching it :) But the texture could stand to be lightened quite a bit, as it isn't that dark. Also the chest patch only goes down a little bit, and it's like a bib. 13:23, December 2, 2015 (UTC)