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Ambermoon (W) ~ For Approval
I'll redo the shading if it's really as crappy as I think it is. I'll probably also smudge the stripes a bit more if needed. 14:27, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sweet! Smooth out the shading a bit. Oh and maybe blur the stripes? 17:06, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'll smude the stripes instead, and I'll redo the painful shading. 01:38, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks fine, but you should smudge it in the direction of the fur. 11:37 Thu Apr 2

I agree with Sunstream, please smooth out the shading. 12:01, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle hole :3 20:06, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Ouch! Painful mistake now that I've been doing chararts so often and I still forget to remove the triangle XP I do have a problem though, I'm in Zhuhai so my computer doesn't have gimp. I'll download it and redo the entire thing. 03:18, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 05:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more 06:19, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Still working, Bramble? 08:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-upsYep... sorry for the delay just got back from my vacation trip, and don't even talk about my computer's crappiness. 09:45, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and define the light on the paws- I'm having a rough time telling the pale parts from the main pelt.

this? 10:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why are there two of them? >.> 10:23, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

All you really have to do is edit the section and say reuploaded, tbh. You don't have to add another image in or anything of the sort- the section automatically updates with the new version once you upload it to the file... idk why it aligns it or adds a second one.

I think it looks lovely :) StormSongz (talk) 15:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you so much:))) but tbh if anyone mentions for the shading to be lightened, I'll totally agree with that 16:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Hm blur the edges of the shading a bit. Looking lovely. =) 18:32, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

can't blur it more also lightened it^^ 03:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe erase a little of the shading on that back ear on the left edge, to show a little light shining on it? Also, a little more shading along the the right edge of her cheek fur. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:31, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 12:41, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Not happy with these stripes :/ 03:06, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading. 03:14, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know but she seems a little lighter than her other images? It could be the use of highlights though. Also, I think the stripes are thicker and less dense on her other images. 03:45, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

If you can see here- http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Lilyheart.warrior.png - she has some gold highlights on her face and sides. Can you add those in? 13:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups They were already in, under the darker stripes, so I can't add them. I used the warrior image for reference, sooo... sorry :/ And my images always seem to look lighter, it's just the highlights. 16:50, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

the belly looks pretty grey, lighten the shading up a tad? she's pretty 20:51 Fri Apr 3

reuploaded 23:13, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 05:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading that is between the back and the belly gives the stomach a lumpy look. Could you remove it please? I'm so sorry you can totally ignore me if you want 23:21 Sun Apr 5

Still working, Shinx? Four days is good enough of a time to ask and I know you appreciate reminders.

yeeeep, I was sick for a couple days and didn't really get on the computer, sorry. 08:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think all her apprentice and her warrior need to be tweaked, as she has white patches, it's shown on her kit but not on the others. Having a white underbelly + chest doesn't really indicate patches. Could you add them, please? 09:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Nominate it first, please. Then you can ask Shinx to add the patches.

Nomination is up 10:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Needs to be dark brown, as she was specified to be that color. And add the gold highlights that were mentioned before, please. User: Dewdrop56/ talk 7:43, April, 10, 2015

Add more shading to the very edge of her tail, along the left side right next to the lineart, and pull back the shading off the white part just a little, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:32, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

She is dark brown, exactly the same shade as her other images. I colorpicked from them. She only looks lighter because I add highlights to my images. And Jayie, you kind of make sense?? I get what you mean for me to do, but where exactly on the tail do you mean? Sorry, I can't figure out where exactly you meant by "The very edge of her tail, along the left side right next to the lineart". Do you mean the tip of the tail, next to the lineart, or...? Sorry >< 22:25, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Set's being tweaked for white patches 22:47, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Evaluation
Here's Dewy! All colorpicked from Dewpaw Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 23:16, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. 23:47, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

There are a lot of uncolored spots; fill them in, please. Also, define the shading and earpink. 00:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

In addition, there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. 00:03, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you're using the right sized blank. Did you grab it from the PCA main page? 04:36, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

If you need the right blank size, you could find it :)

There is a greenish spot on his haunch or something, you're going to have to do something about it. 13:32, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

@Scarletwind I used the male long-furred warrior blank. @Icebreeze and Foxy I'll fix it. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 13:43, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

What Scar means is that you've used the wrong sized blank. Go to the link Skid posted, right click on that image, save it, and use that to redo the image. 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

There's also waste in the part between the third and fourth chest tufts. 14:53, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fix the lighting on him. What program do you use? Also, isint he suppost to have a white belly/chest? 15:19, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I use PAINT.NET for all my images. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 17:31, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using layers? Everything seems to be blurred together. 08:18, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Well, in the new image I am creating (because of the wrong-sized blank), my layers in order from bottom to top are: Background Color, White-Gray Patches, Lineart + Eyes, Shading, and Earpink.

Ah, I think you should put the shading and earpink before the lineart. :) 21:50, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you fill in the un-colored parts around the outer edge? And there is some waste at the upper and outer edge of the tail, from what I see. Spott ehw ob bl e  It's   Lemon    scented

BTW I'm working on the new Dewnose, don't worry about any waste or etc. from this previous image. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups - *sighs heavily* :3 Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:23, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the white on the belly more visible? I can't see it.

You forgot to delete the part in between the belly and paws. It's not part of his belly! StormSongz (talk) 22:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)StormSongz

Define the light on the legs, please. 23:50, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest putting the white on another layer instead, that might the be the reason why it's turning out to look grey. 00:13, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Needs more white near the muzzle and down to the belly. The gray should be more slate- colored and the white more brightened. User:Dewdrops56/talk 6:290, April,9, 2015

That gray-white needs to be brigthened to pure white, that's what he has on his apprentice and kit. It also need to be spread so that it's touching the lineart. Yours is leaking away from the lineart a lot. Look at the apprentice. He needs white paws, a white tail-tip, white belly, white throat-to-chest, and white muzzle, nose, and under his eyes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:44, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Pink Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ohlook. 22:32 Tue Apr 7

I think the white needs to be brightened quite a bit. He looks too...yellow? StormSongz (talk) 22:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

the white is fine, actually. nice job, hawky 23:16, 04/7/2015 Looks great. If you need to, define shading. User talk: Dewdrops66/talk > 25:23, 04/7/2015

Hawky, Perchpaw isn't archived. I'll archive it this time, but if you post something without waiting again, it will be declined on the spot. 00:05, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

can you maybe layer some blue over his eyes? from what I know albinistic cats have blue eyes that look red, not just red. 03:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah see I was going to make the eyes blue but I wasn't sure if you'd be able to see the red in the pupils. 22:13 Wed Apr 8

...Can you guys tell the shading is defined? I feel like I don't see it so I might define it some more... but idk. 22:14 Wed Apr 8

Define the light on then back legs, please. 00:09, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

His eyes are too, blue. We have no cite for it, anyways. User talk: Dewdropps56/talk > 6:42, April, 9, 2015( UTC)

and no cite for red eyes either, and albinistic cat eyes arent pure pink theyre blue with a pink tint, like humans I believe. ._. maybe tint it a little bit pink if it doesn't look purple, though. 13:45, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

The pupils are dark red - which I can lighten to make it more pinkish. I can't do much with the eyes because pixels don't allow much detail in them. Also, the eyes are technically artist's choice, so idk about that. If I make them any pinker they may turn purple. However, I could add a pink dot instead of a blue one, so it would be blue, pink, blue. idk you can tell me. I will get to the light definition in my next upload. 22:33 Thu Apr 9

yeah true, and I think that would be a good idea actually. 10:13, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 0:27 Sat Apr 11

Define the light on the back leg furthest away from us. 12:23, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Minnow (R) ~ For Approval
I'm trying something new for me so paws crossed it works. 03:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur or smudge the gray 03:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I also defined the texture, cause you couldn't really see it. 06:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot, please.

Blur the gray more and define the shading more 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can't see it. misread fox's comment at first, didn't notice the last bit 10:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload The white is pure white, it's the shading. For that reason, I won't darken the shading anymore. 22:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define doesnt automatically mean darken. I'd suggest you try to unblur/unsmudge the shading some, because i still can't see it. Also, to brighten up the white, perhaps try using pure white highlights? Its not mandatory, so that part is up to you. 05:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Not exactly sure how to do that, but I've just redone the shading altogether so that it's covering more of the gray fur. Look much better. 05:39, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Much better. :) Define the shading on the tail? 07:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:34, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth on the tail? it looks flat. 10:14, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define all the shading except on the legs? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:52, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:43, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define light on the tail 11:05, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't really any lighting there, since it's behind the body from where the light source is. You want me to add light and if so where? 23:30, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

If you are not adding light then add some shading depth, since the tail looks a little flat. 12:22, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (L) - CBA
Why the hell did she hang out with Clear Pain in the first place 08:37, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes just a tiny bit by a pixel or two where they're thicker. There are a couple that look to be maybe six or so pixels long, when they look slightly shorter in width on the rogue. Also, unsmudge the tail stripes a bit as well- they're not as smudged on her rogue image. That's what I'm basing all my comments off of since it's a clear side-view. And she hung out because they're both trash imho.

Re-uploaded *prays to Erins that her kits won't be trash too* 08:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why do people hate them so much? >.> I love them both ;_; especially Clear Sky. Anyways, beautiful^^ I think her rogue image's stripes are less broken, and are less smudged/lighter texture. 09:42, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine, I have the rogue file that Beebs sent to me and I matched it 09:44, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

What's the point of asking for comments if users are going to reject them as often as they do? Yes, I'm going there, because this is totally unnecessary. Bramblesnow is correct, honestly. I'm looking right at her rogue image and they are smudged slightly less than this.

Re-uploaded Sorry about that ;.; is this better? 10:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I have a slight concern. If it's a side view, and Star Flower has a stripe along her back, wouldn't it show less than that big stripe you have? Maybe thin it out a little bit, as well as the base of the tail towards her back leg. StormSongz (talk) 15:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Am I the only that's happy for Clear Sky, that he has a new mate? Looks great. See if you Should consider blurring it....?User:Dewdrops56/Dewdrops56 8:21, April, 8, 2015

The stripes are smudged, not blurred. I'll try to smudge them more when I've got the computer, but not much, otherwise it would be just contradicting to what Cloudy said, and someone will tell me to unsmudge it again. Also, as for the stripe, the loner is facing a different side. But actually, I might redo these stripes since I seem to have trouble tweaking them right. 23:22, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I am not smudging them more now. That will contradict to what Skye said, someone will tell me to unsmudge it again because that's how it looks on the rogue 02:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks good now :3 13:54, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Strenthen the shading on the belly and throat, they're leaking away from the side edges of the legs and muzzle, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:57, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you try lightening her white fur? I know it's the shading, but it is described as pure white, and a bit of highlight lighting wouldn't hurt. 23:50, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back and/or head a little bit? Unless told otherwise (I'm sleepy and on my tablet). You did gorgeous on this. :)

Re-uploaded There isn't back shading Blitz, but thanks :) 06:04, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 09:04, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the dorsal stripe on the rogue's tail is thinner than the one you have on the loner's tail- can you thin it out by a few pixels?

Re-uploaded 14:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re- CBA? 14:15, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Cricket (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ew ._. But hey I got my uploader working again. K so I would rather not darken the shading too much more as it starts to looks really yucky with the base colors. Comment away~ 13:04, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. It shouldn't look too bad, imho. Is it tinted, or did you use black? Either choice is good, and I know black on ginger or orange cats looks pretty wicked.

Should he be short furred? Slate said that they are completely different. Just a suggestion!User:Dewdrops56/talk, 8:25, April, 8, 2015

Re-uploaded. Lol I actually used black, even though I had serious thoughts about tinting it, but I decided to give it a chance. And Dewdrops, I think Slate was talking about their personalities rather than their fur length, kind of like Squirrelflight and Leafpool. 19:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add more shading to the back of the neck and upper shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:01, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did a couple other things too. 14:10, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenwing (MCA) ~ CBA
Changes Yeah... I can't shade on black cats or apprentice/mca blanks. I will probably redo this painfully bad shading on my next upload. 16:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the leaves. 17:52, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reups redid the shading, and I got rid of the waste. 22:39, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

More shading just under the bend of that front leg? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:02, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know the exact place you want me to put more shading - I've looked, but I don't see a place that needs more shading added. 22:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a bt more on the gind lets and up to the tail? Great job! 02:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the base a few ticks, not too much, just a little bit. 10:39, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 13:42, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 14:28, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reed (Ro) - For Approval
20:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? Looking nice :) 05:01, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the overall shading- It may just be my monitor, but i can barely see any. 05:14, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

He looks so fluffy! O-O 13:55, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed, define overall shading, and lighten the silver maybe a touch? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:04, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups I tinted the shading,i hope it helps :p 09:55, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs furthest from us? Pretty! 13:50, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks :) 15:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Brindlekit (TAQ) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay... comments? 20:41, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit more? And define the earpink a bit as well? Otherwise I love her! 22:27, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 22:31, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

This is so beautiful O.O define the light on the tail? 00:17, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a touch more, and define the shading a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:04, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Fox! =) 21:10, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks good! 00:29, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! =D I really appreciate it but please give some criticism next time as non-critique comments are considered spam. 01:27, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a lil bit? So cute! 13:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! 14:06, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Honeykit (K) - CBA
p much a diluted brightheart 13:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Looks beautiful and adorable! User: Dewdrops/ talk 6:33, April, 10, 2015

Dewdrop, please do not spam an image with non-critique comments. Compliments are nice, but they are considered as spam. For the image, define the ear pink just a little. 14:05, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:29, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Erase a little of the shading on the chest, the light should be hitting there. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:05, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:07, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I absolutely love this. CBA?

The left ear looks too yellow. Define it to pink, please?[[ User: Dewdrops56/talk] 7:04, April,m11, 2015

That would be the earfur. I believe it looks fine as-is. 14:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine. Continuing CBA. 14:25, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Jay Frost (Ancient) - For Approval
This is the culmination of all the good things in this world. :D Also, I accidently misnamed this file, could someone rename it for me? Sorry about that. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:07, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I named it Jay Frost.ancient (2).png by accident. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:08, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink? Lovely! 22:52, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

And define the shading everywhere. Its so beautiful x3 02:01, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should cite the fact that she's an adult on the page first 09:52, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's a he! Anyways, this is soooooo gorgeous... 10:08, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

What are those pink marks, along the back and the hind leg? Are they scars? How on earth do you even do this stuff? This is incredible... 13:47, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

You never cease to amaze me with your beautiful chararts, Jayie. Do you mind smudging the scars just a tad? 15:31, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tweaked the shading, darkened it and tried a different hue, I think this looks better, tweaked the texture, much happier with it, defined the ear pink (it's a color that works well on large images but is really hard to see on chararts, so I did my best to define it with the shading), yes the pink are scars, I don't think smudging them would help, it would just make them look all wavy and blurred like fur markings, and thanks. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 20:06, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Tweaked the saturation on the texture, it was making Jay Frost look a little more gray than he's supposed to be. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:00, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smokekit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I actually like this wow 19:23, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, if there is any. Looks lovely. c: 19:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. Its probably my monitor or its probably really hard to see. 13:58, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:16, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 09:40, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Shadepaw (A) ~ For Approval
21:59, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Looks too black, or maybe it's just my POV. User: Dewdrops56/ talk 15:21, April, 10, 2015

Re-uploaded. Could've just been the shading, I lightened it a little. 22:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

It's still black on my screen. Maybe lighten the base, too? Also, can you define the earpink? 23:31, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with the above; it looks like solid black. I'm having a hard time seeing the initial pelt color. 00:22, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Hopefully it's still dark brown. 00:30, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, it's dark brown, and much better! Define the earpink some more. Looking good! 00:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! I think the earpink looks fine. 01:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading around the face. This is purrtyyy! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:14, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten it up everywhere and blur it tons. 10:38, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and back legs. Good job! 13:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's just me, but I'm still having a hard time seeing the ear pink. Maybe lighten it a tad? 13:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Looks way better now! I can actually see the pelt color. Maybe define ear shading, though? User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:08,April, 11,2015

Re-uploaded.  16:35, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Looks better! 18:22, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Noticed some waste on the back, I don't know how I missed that. 18:45, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
I was so happy when Thrush was approved. I'm going to try to get this one approved aswell :) 22:54, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little, maybe lighten it too. 23:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

The base colour doesn't look right. this is the base colour I used for the warrior. 23:47, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Red-did the shading postion.. base colour.. and raised the lightness of the shading. 01:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit unless someone says otherwise. (Sorry, I'm tired and I'm making some errors tonight). ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:16, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink does need to be dulled down, indeed. Smudge it more too so that it doesn't look so hard edged. and while you're at it, blur the shading more. 09:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

This needs to be renamed into File:Appledusk.star.png 10:37, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit. 13:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

i think its fine. 13:46, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Renamed.

re-up bloop? 13:55, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe get rid of some of the shading on the side of the nose facing the light source, as well as the muzzle. It wouldn't be shaded there. 15:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 22:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking where the tail meets the side. 01:39, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is leaking away from the linear art 01:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 02:15, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail please 09:41, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Sleekpaw (A) ~ For Approval
very sleek very shiny 13:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I love the texture! Very interesting. Define the ear pink just a bit? And maybe the belly shading? 15:38, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, do you mean define? I think the tail shading could be defined a little. I like this, she looks like she's grinning lol 09:43, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Petalkit (MV) (Star) - For Evalutation
My first charart. Horrible texture, I know... ♨ Little   Latte  ♨ 14:42, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paws. This is very good =). 15:29, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups thank you =) 21:39 Sat Apr 11 21:39, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smduge the texture on the tail. Lovely 22:41, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

^^And on the paws and head, (It seems like texture so thats why Im asking) 22:43, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I don't think changes are showing. here 23:40 Sat Apr 11 23:40, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The lines could still be smudged a lot more. 00:30, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reedshine (MV) (Q) ~ For Evaluation
My first charart! I hope you guys like it. I worked real hard on it. Okay...comments? 15:20, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe this should be "For Evaluation". Other than that, I find it good! ♨ Little   Latte  ♨ 15:26, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

*fixed*  15:28, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

blur the belly shading, and don't align your images. looking good. 15:30, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:32, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The stomach shading could still use blurring 00:31, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

I love this. Maybe smooth out the tail shading. I still love this >.< 01:42, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Thanks guys! 02:08, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the leg furthest away from us 09:15, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Me no like. ;-; (Did the image align? or did I misname? I can't tell)

Smooth out the shading on the back, define the hind leg shading, define the eye depth, and blur the earpink just a tad. Looks nice, other than that. 18:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. 18:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Don't know if changes are showing.

Blur/smudge the shading more, and smooth it out. It's looking a bit blotchy right now. 23:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have no idea why this didn't happen when I did Spiketail. Probably because I'm used to setting it to at least 20/25

Define the shading on the legs. Those eyes look sexy X3 09:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit? 12:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Lizardtail (W) ~ For Approval
So here is my first character. Yes, I don't know how to do texture... ✿Bird ride23✿  Colorful world is around me  19:01, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink? I can't see it. This is beautiful for your first charart! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Defined the earpink. I think it looks more beautiful. ✿Bird ride23✿  Colorful world is around me  20:18, April 11, 2015 (UTC)



The file names need to be the same. When you re-upload, you overwrite the image. Also, it has to be a .png file named Lizardtail.warrior.png. (sorry if I sound harsh, I don't want to sound mean ;~;) Though I said define last time, could you blur/smudge the earpink just a little bit?

Re-ups - This? ✿Bird ride23✿  Colorful world is around me  22:34, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe let some more light shine on the tail where there's a lot of shading near the base; towards the light source. (Erase some shading) 12:55, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Quiet Rain (Star) ~ For Approval
WHEE 8) 8) 8) 01:50, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! Could you add a white-flecked muzzle and ragged fur, which she's being nominated for right now? Also, maybe define the shading a touch? 01:53, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

When she joined starclan It said she looked "sleek and young" so I don't think she would need those, I'll define the shading. thanks 8) 01:54, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped 8) 01:58, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen the shading on the face? Gorgeousss 02:10, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't have a back stripe, and she needs stripes on her forelegs. 03:16, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uppd 09:13, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

I love this! Maybe brighten the ear pink just a tad? 12:57, April 12, 2015 (UTC)