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Icicle (Kit) ~ Declined
Teenie Tiny Itty Bitty Kitty! ♥♥♥ -- 14:07, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very cute :3 darken the shading on the tail and paws ^^ (I also fixed the heading for ya) 14:10, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped~ better? -- 14:38, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, please. 15:21, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth too. And I'll get to that GIMP tutorial later today I promise. I just didn't get much time last night. .-. sorryz. 15:46, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I will do asap. Which might not be for a bit... -- 15:58, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

There is a white pixel on the back foot and there is waste everywhere. One the otherhand, beautiful job! 21:38, February 24, 2015 (UTC)

She's pale gray so lighten her up tons. 00:06, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped~ Made lighter, shading makes him look darker.-- 16:11, February 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste below his foot. The color of the cat is also overlapping the lineart on the legs, the lineart should be pure black. Everything should be below it. Define the shading, and lighten him up a little. 23:28 Wed Feb 25

I made the tutorial I'll get it to you hopefully tomorrow. And could you smooth out the shading a bit? 05:26, February 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head?--✫Silverpool on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 09:17, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink, it's looking purple. 12:36, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Upped --- Oh wow i changed him a lot... -- 16:41, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink is still hot pink. Waste is above ears and around the paws.... Can you put shading, everywhere? 23:13, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

Andddd make Icicle more grey. He's turning a little white. nvm 23:15, February 28, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart. When you use a paintbrush before blurring, don’t just stop around the lineart, brush over it, so it spreads everywhere over the image.-- 00:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-Uppied! Thanks for all the advice! -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 03:11, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading and remove the waste. Define the earpink as well, and the shading is still leaking away from the lineart. 03:19 Sun Mar 1

What do you mean by "The shading is leaking away from the lineart"? -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 14:35, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

You see how the shading is kinda not next to the linear art? That's called leaking. To fix it, just add a new layer then add shading on the part where the shading isn't touching the liner Art. ^^ 14:43, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Removed the waste~ -- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 16:19, March 1, 2015 (UTC)

Anything else?-- ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾ 00:12, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks very blotchy. Try to darken it, then blur it. Add shading to the neck. 00:16, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

There's still waste, and the color of the cat is still overlapping the lineart. If you don't already, try to use layers. It makes making charart so much easier when you do. Darken, smooth out, and blur the shading, and define the earpink as well. 12:35 Tue Mar 3

Add shading to the tail. 00:14, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paws just a tad. Not to much, just a couple ticks on the opacity bar will do. 00:45, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

You still working? 05:04, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

A week without uploads, this has to be declined. Sorry. 04:49, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

It hasn't been a week, it's only been six days since Foxy commented. I'm putting this back for approval unless someone else says otherwise. 04:57, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Damn, oops. My apologies. 05:27, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

isn't it just a week without uploads instead of just a week without comments? ignore me if i'm wrong 18:04 Mon Mar 9

Give it another day - no uploads by then, declined. 21:54, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, its been a week, declined. 00:23, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Tetszenek ezek az ősi nevek^^ 20:16, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and maybe smudge the gray a tad.-- 21:22, March 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Changes:http://www.ezimba.com/work/150304C/ezimba12232556242400.png 19:55, March 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadng more, he looks nice^^ 14:33, March 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Köszi ^^ 18:38, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. 04:50, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Flamepelt (Alt E) - For Approval
I got so much inspiration from Sandstorm's elder for this, and I got the colors from her alt apprentice, actually. If she gets an orange alt, then so does Flamepelt. I am insanely proud of this.

Burnt literally killed me for announcing it cause she wanted it :S could you define the shading on the legs 02:36, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. lmao oops. Burnt already has Running Horse anyways- there's no need to jump the gun on images.

Hey who said I wanted it >:O You see where the transfer from the haunch and the tail? Mind adding some shading there? It seems a bit flat. I'm quite sure some light will be blocked there. I'm so bad at explaining sorry about that X.X 02:51, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There was shading there, actually. It was just flat. I'm also not gonna change the source itself, since as I said above, I basically used Sandstorm's elder as a reference.

lel my shit elder image. anyway can u maybe smudge the facial stripes a teeny bit. 11:06, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Lol, try to keep it a bit more PG..um to be completely honest, I'm having a bit of a hard time seeing the shading. The image isn't flat, so I know there is shading, it's just not too prominent if ya know what I'm saying. So maybe define it a bit more in that way? This is pretty, nice job^^ 14:26, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 'shit' is PG and perfectly acceptable in my book, considering he's talking about his own image and no one else's. Also, I defined the shading, but not that much. I can see it perfectly fine on my own screen. So basically it got defined in certain parts, but not everywhere.

it's fine with me too, but I say if it's bleeped on tv it probably shouldn't be said on a PG wiki page. Just saying :/ it doesn't matter to me though, I'm just thinking of those who feel uncomfortable seeing those kinds of words. 16:58, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

could you lighten the shading actually? it looks kinda dark 23:50 Fri Mar 6

I actually think the darkness is fine- if I lighten it, I can promise that Darkfrost or another user will probably tell me to darken it again. =P

I quite like the shading as it is now, tbh. Mind defining the earpink a tad? damn how do you make such gorgeous tabbies 02:53, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have no idea tbh I looked at an image I liked the style of and went with it.

lol I never said darken it, just make it more visible. It was your choice on how to do so. could you define the shading on the ears a tad? 19:01, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Well, I'm not unblurring the shading, so I don't know how else you'd expect me to define the shading? Unblurring that would make it a mess. Also, there is no shading on these ears- I'm using the source that Sandstorm's elder has, and I don't see any shading on that image, so I'm not adding it here.

I can see it fine as it is now tbh. 05:35, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a tad, please. 17:24, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

poking in to say that the only shading on the ears would be on the front of them considering its the same source from the elder. 17:42, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Hmm this is gonna sound weird but there is a random black dot above his leg and on his chest. Was that intentional or... 00:26, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see the dot??????

It's on his chest, and another one is following the linear art on his right front paw. 00:34, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Um, the "dots" are actually the linear art. IDK what you are talking about either. 10:43, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Mistlekit (TPB) (Alt Ki) ~ CBA
lel 13:16, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

很漂亮，^_^ 干得好. define the light on the tail and legs? 13:20, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

tail looks fine to me but legs could use some light 23:49 Fri Mar 6

Define the earpink in the ---> ear. Damn david, this is gorgeous. 00:28, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Cute, I love kits. Smooth out the chest shading? ignore me if it's not even shading... 07:26, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. lbr this isnt even that good it was a 15 minute job 12:42, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Gorgeous, as always. 00:25, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Meh black kitteh. Comments? 14:19, March 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 18:18, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it just fine tbh. 05:03, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Agreeing with the first comment. It should be defined, or at least more visible. 17:52, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, honestly I could see it fine..but I removed a little shading on the ears for you guys. 10:23, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
the third alt. i know i forgot the torn ear, i'll add that and lighten the shading in the next upload 23:33 Fri Mar 6

Define the scar. 02:55, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, also it's leaking on the haunch. 14:16, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

i dont think the shading needs to be blurred more but i will fix it leaking 15:20 Sat Mar 7

reups 15:30 Sat Mar 7

Actually i agree with Burnt, honestly. Just a little bit though. Define the shading on the ---> foreleg, also. 18:15, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

reups 15:39 Sun Mar 8

There is waste by our right forepaw, and blur the tail tip shading please. Otherwise I think this looks good. 00:24, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

nice 15:27 Mon Mar 9

Define the shading a teeny tiny bit more on --> that leg and I'll CBA it. 19:15, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Mist (KP) Kittypet ~ For Approval
Welp. I tried... 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged the collor. 02:49, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg, and blur/smudge the transitions between the colors on the collar if you can. It still looks a bit hard-edged. 02:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged it more and did some stuff :P 03:10, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

The color needs to match his other images, so it has to be lighter. 14:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Add some more light on the tail and add some shading to the collar. 21:45 Sat Mar 7

Tiger, Mist has no other Kittypet images. So I don't know the original collar colour. 21:34, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, I mean the body color, not the collar. It needs to match the loner and kit images, so it needs to be a lighter shade of gray. I suggest to colorpick it. 21:44, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I'll brighten up the collar later. Couldn't change collar colour because I don't know what it originally was :/. (I'll clear the waste in the next upload) 22:05, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 2nd try... 22:17, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Since apparently I needed to move the files, this has now been renamed to Mist (KP).kittypet.png.

Lighten him up more, hes still quite dark as he is now. 01:02, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 05:00, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up the shading as well 18:01 Mon Mar 9

re-up Any better? I lightened up his fur colour from the kit image. 22:47, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading makes it look like he has a dark stripe down his back, kinda like Graystripe.

How do I change it? Do I lighten it up, Smudge, blur... 23:19, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I hit publish without reading over my comment. x.x Yes, lightening it should probably do the trick.

re-up Lightened the shading. 23:31, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and light on the tail and define the light on the foreleg? 19:18, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Let's bring her back with a redone pattern 11:47, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 22:44, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did other stuff too 06:40, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 11:00, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:35, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. Q) - For Approval
phew... it's been a long time since I've done this... She was described with having white patches in Dovewing's Silence. We've done alts for a change in stripe color, so I see no reason not to do one for a change in patch color. Comments? 02:35, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

I don't really think so. It doesn't describe her having different colours... 02:40, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Well, white patches implies a ginger base, and ginger patches implies a white base. I think it's a zebra-style moment, but Darkstripe got the same treatment.

I think it counts, since she was clearly described with ginger patches, not white. Anyway, define the shading everywhere. 02:49, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:04, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs? So pretty :3 07:58, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:27, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt MCA) ~ For Approval
Feels weird to be posting this so soon. Anyway, credits to Foxy for finding the cite, she was called pale so... Comments? I'm super proud of this. 04:59, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Was she called pale or pale gray? if it was pale grey then you'd have to remove the stripes 10:08, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

She was called pale, not pale gray. 10:42, March 10, 2015 (UTC)