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Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here.

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail?

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail?

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean.

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match?

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional.  16:01 Sat Feb 6 

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps.  10:53 Sun Feb 7 

I think the tail could be raised a few pixels up on the back of the cat, and the neck needs to be thickened a bit ( http://prntscr.com/a1872f ), and the raised paw should be backed up a few pixels and made smaller. The tum could be dropped a pixel or two, and the ears made a bit neater. The longhair should probably have long fur all the way up to the chin too, as well as the shoulder being fuzzy. 23:45, 02/9/2016

Pasha (KP) - For Approval
probably gonna redo this later. i was in a hurry. 21:48 Tue Feb 2

Could you maybe lighten the base slightly so we can see the shading? 22:19, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base is fine, as the description does state very clearly "almost black" but could you define facial shading just a smidge? 03:23, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This could be my screen but he looks too dark to be "almost black". Perhaps a darkness like Crowfeather would do.

Define the shading depth? 15:19 Wed Feb 3

I think the darkness is fine but can you add some more eye ddepth? Unless it's there and I can't see it. 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base could be lightened a little bit- she was supposed to be almost black, and this looks black. Crowfeather's shade would work wonderfully for this, I think. I also think the shading could be darkened a bit too.

can you make him more brown too. 15:22, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. Some said Crowfeather and Skt said brown so I tried to split the difference 00:53 Sat Feb 6

Why would he need to be brown? He was never described as "dark brown, nearly black" W~

The collar looks flat. Define the shading on it please.

He's not specified as dark grey or dark ginger or anything, so the default would be brown, correct?  11:37 Sat Feb 6 

yes, it would be. :T 11:46, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define the nosepink, and the shading on the front leg? 20:08, 02/10/2016

Bellapaw (Lo) ~ For Approval
I tried to match Berry's apprentice while Rileypaw was on CBA, but I couldn't ;_; So instead have a classic tabby  19:15 Fri Feb 5 

Maybe you could make her colors more like Firestar's? She is said to look exactly like him after all. 22:01, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

I've been playing around for a little while and honestly I can't ake the colors any more like Firestar's whilst still matching the pale orange description. I even colorpicked and just made the colors lighter- it still doesn't like anything like Firestar. Unless you can give me a color that's both pale orange //and// looks like Firestar..?  <span style="">23:35 Fri Feb 5 

Mind if I play around with a new pattern/colors on the apprentice and see if I can get it to look more like Firestar but still light? If not, that's totally fine, I'll match this. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:49, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I'd much rather keep the pattern like this if possible (I'm really proud of it) but mess with the color all you like. Would you like the file?  <span style="">11:08 Sat Feb 6 

So what's our stance with this? Is Jayie still going to take the apprentice to fiddle around with it to get a color Shinx can match? Or are we not doing anything? 12:42, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Jayie has the file and has said that she's going to fiddle with the colors on the apprentice. I'm still waiting for that though. This isn't going to be declined if it hits one week while I'm waiting for Jayie, is it?  <span style="">13:47 Wed Feb 10 

Nope. 13:48, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

reups Heard back from Jayie. Any more firestar-ish from here just looks dark tan, or bright red, or yellow rather than pale orange. Trust me, I've tried.  <span style="">15:21 Wed Feb 10 

Can you lighten the shading a little? <span style="">16:04 Fri Feb 12

Icewhisker (MC) - For Approval
This looked better in gimp. :/ 01:37, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and eye depth.

Re-uploaded: :/ 19:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading? <span style="">19:52 Sun Feb 7

Define the light on the legs, actually, and expand and define shading everywhere else. The herbs also look pretty neon, perhaps saturate them a little more? <span style="">18:29, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: 18:45, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

smudge the earpink 21:09, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes 22:12, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? It doesn't look any different from before, they still look fully covered in shading <span style="">22:50, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: THe earpink was already smudged before but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 23:23, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think since your source is coming from the top left, the shading on the legs and tail would be switched to the other side. 00:39, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Theres some shading leaking on the back leg. Define the light on the legs and theres also some shading from the tail leaking onto the cheek. 18:54, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I think this is as defined as the light's going to get, however, if it isn't satisfactory I'll try and do it some more while wrestling with a shark. Is that funny? Idk, I'm tired. 23:59, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a little? 01:22, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the belly.

Re-uploaded; 12:35, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Leafpool (MC) - For Approval
Also looked better in gimp. 01:59, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Please smudge the stripes with a hard edged brush instead of blurring them, as they're smudged on her other images. Also, the shading needs to be defined and its leaking in some places. Also, the paws look gray. The ear pink is also very hard edged.

Could you define your light source? The tail shading says it's the right, but rest of the image says the left. Also, define the light on the raised front leg.  <span style="">10:50 Sun Feb 7 

Re-uploaded: <_< 18:56, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Why the "<_<"? It's not like I and Shinx were being rude or anything, I was just asking you to fix something on your image. And define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us.

Re-uploaded: It's directed towards my image, Fox. Not you or Shinx. 01:59, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading ? She looks a bit flat <span style="">18:21, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: I can't expand this anymore. This as much as it'll get before it looks like the entire image is in shading. 18:44, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think she has a stripe down her back and tail? 22:25, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Couch you blur the shading a bit more on the tum? Also define the shading on the raised paw <span style="">22:44, 02/8/2016

About the stripe, is it visible on this blank? I'm not sure, that's why I didn't include it. 23:22, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Please kill me. 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The paws still look gray

Re-uploaded: I think this is gonna be as white as I'm gonna get it. 12:35, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

There's more white on her chest in her other images (at least the kit and apprentice). And the white parts look a bit more dark in her other pictures. Also, there doesn't seem to be much shading on the herbs. <span style="">22:41 Thu Feb 11

Re-uploaded: please don't ask me to extend the white anymore. 00:02, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the stripe color to match the others, and the white on her face extends out over her muzzle. She also has dark ear-tips and a dark tail-tip, and the white on her chest should be expanded a bit mroe, as it covers the whole chest. (If you lower it down to about where the stripe crosses below it, and expand it to the left until you hit the lineart defining the chest, it'll probs be alright.) If you want the file for her warrior, I can send that to you, too, for exact colors and whatnot. 06:25, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, can you please send it to me? My email is icestormrocks@aol.com 13:23, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Kestrelwing (MC alt) ~ CBA


idk if this makes sense but there's shading that has leaked onto the tail from the head making it look a little striped???— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:58, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Add more shading on the back part of the image, and remove the shading on ==> that side of the tail, as your source is coming from that way 00:40, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Smooth the shading on his right hindleg and, not entirely sure, but I think he's supposed to have a gray nose 05:27, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Smooth out the shading on the paws, and would he have shading on his back? 13:37, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

There's shading leaking from the forepaw on the ground to the raised one <span style="">20:12, 02/10/2016

Re-uploaded Pretty sure he'd have shading on his back, as the head would block some light out.

Makes sense. Commet sbefore approval? 19:49, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Echosnout (MC) ~ For Approval
03:26, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

I have the file for the StarClan let me know if you need it. 20:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth.

Reups 19:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

can you crop the image? 19:14, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 19:18, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't the image be cropped some more, or is it jsut my eyes? 13:37, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

It's pretty much the same as Mothwing's - I think it's alright. 14:10, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be cropped more- there's still way too much excess space in <-- side of the lineart. For that matter, Mothwing's needs to be cropped too.

Cloudspots (MC) - CBA
My first medicine cat image. All colors from the rogue image, which I still have the file for. Coments? 05:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten the white on the paws and ears.

Reuploaded. I can't get the ears any whiter than this. 20:15, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 02:00, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:04, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the white paws? That should solve the issue of them looking grey. Also, could you possibly define the light on the herbs? <span style="">18:15, 02/8/2016

Reuploaded. 18:34, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more, and please crop the image.

Reuploaded. Tried smudged shading for the first time on an official image. 17:24, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest.

Blur or smudge the top of the white chest patch. 21:35, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't smooth out the shading anymore or it will start leaking away from lineart. 23:36, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Reed Tail (MC) ~ CBA
Working with my own blank is harder then i tought o-o 13:01, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Difine the shading a smidge 13:13, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:30, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Crop the image, please. There's way too much excess space.

Re-ups 15:30, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 19:50, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Swiftfoot (MC) ~ CBA
13:16, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the shading a bit more? Nice job! <span style="">19:54 Sun Feb 7

Re-ups Thx 20:38, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Crop the image, please. There's way too much excess space.

Smooth out the shading a little bit?  <span style="">13:55 Wed Feb 10 

Re-ups 15:30, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 19:52, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval
matched the colors with the old one— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:27, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I can barely pick out the herbs from the fur. Maybe lighten the herb colours. 16:33, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:39, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading, define and smudge the earpink, and define the shading on the herbs and berries. Also, there's waste in that space between the raised front leg and the hind leg that touches said leg. <span style="">18:12, 02/8/2016

Try to lighten the herbs some more. 05:45, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 17:59, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Should this not be called for evaluation? Sorry if I'm wrong. 18:24, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

There's no point in changing the heading now, considering she's already passed the requirements to become an apprentice in the project.

Define the herb shading - they look a bit flat 19:10, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:19, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading on the main body, particularly around the lower-back. <span style="">16:53 Wed Feb 10

Milkfur (RC) (MC) - CBA
I think I misnamed my file and forgot the RC part...and let me know if there needs to be a light texture layer beneath the stripes. It was sort of difficult to tell on the original beneath the smudging. <span style="">16:58 Mon Feb 8

Yeah, I'd move it, but that would alter the previous version as well. Just go ahead and upload over File:Milkfur (RC).mc.png whenever you have the time. And yes, there should be texture. I don't know many images of Beebs' that don't have texture.

Reuploaded Thanks, Cloud. That's what I thought about the texture. And I am defining it on the face on the next upload. <span style="">02:50 Tue Feb 9

could you define the shading on the front legs a little more.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 21:49, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Since you need to reupload anyways, could you please crop the image? There's way too much excess space.

Reuploaded <span style="">16:57 Wed Feb 10

Comments before approval? 19:53, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Micah (MC) ~ For Approval
Eyyyyy 00:35, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Receed the shading on the chest, I think a bit more light would be hitting her chest, and, with your light source, the shading should switching to the other side of her left foreleg. Very pretty! 05:30, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Micahs a dude bro xD and also no to the leg, because the other leg is in front of that one and would be blocking light. 05:35, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

lightent eh chest and cheek shading— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:34, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The shading darkness is fine. Its the same darkness on the other images. Ill get to removing some chest shading tonight 18:52, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to lighten the shading that much, Winter. It does look a bit dark in some places. I know you prefer darker shading, but it does appear to clash in some places, such as the tail, face, and front legs.

But i cant lighten the shading depth without lightening it everywhere else, and id rather not get told to define the shading. 18:55, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

I think in this case, you should be fine. The shading doesn't need to be lightened all that much- it's not that dark, and the way you have it blurred gives it tons of depth, even when it's light (which I don't get how you shade that way but that's another stoRY)

Comments before approval? 13:41, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you smooth out the transition from shading to pelt on the neck please? <span style="">16:52 Wed Feb 10

What do you mean? 16:54, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

And my comment still stands, by the way. Also, I think it's a bit too sharp, is what she's saying.

Perhaps she means from the face to the neck, to the left of the berries? That's what I'm seeing. <span style="">01:38, 02/11/2016

Also, could you blur/smooth the shading a little more on the raised front leg? And perhaps expand the tum shading a little. <span style="">19:09, 02/12/2016

Redthistle (MC) - CBA
I literally have no idea how I did that pattern last time. o.o This is my attempt to replicate it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:06, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on the main body a tad? 06:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also sharpened the pattern a bit to make it match better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:25, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

smudge the leg markings a tad and sharpen shading on the legs as well more to the front— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

could you smudge the lighter tail markings a little more? the only hard-edgeness i see is towards the middle part of the tail. absolutely stunning, jayie! <span style="">20:06 Tue Feb 9

Crop the image, please. There's way too much excess space.

Aren't I supposed to keep it the same size as the original blank? I thought that was the general rule. Otherwise, aren't all the medicine cat images, if individually cropped, going to be different sizes? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:57, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

As I said to Princess, it's a common misconception that there needs to be that much space; in fact, there really shoudn't be that much extra space. David also cropped the MC blanks earlier, so that's kind of a defunct statement now. You are more than allowed (and it is very much preferred) to crop your images.

Seems to make more sense to crop the original blanks first, but you said Skt did that already, so kay, I'll crop it to that, then. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:08, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 18:30, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 18:35, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) ~ For Approval
It's been a while... 06:07, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Defin e the shading and expand it on the stomach, and define the light on the first front legs. Also smooth it out some more. 06:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also tried to match the previous image better. It's so hard o.o 06:49, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded again 06:51, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add shading on the back leg and the tail and expand it on the stomach ? 06:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:58, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a little more?  <span style="">09:42 Tue Feb 9 

his stripes need mottles on them. 13:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

and crop the image too. 14:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not very happy with his mottles and his stripe style, can anyone give me tips? :\ 07:44, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:56, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Again... 11:00, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add some more depth on the stripes with the stomach, and possibly smooth out the shading some more? I'm sorry if I'm being picky - you don't have to do it if you don't want to. 12:41, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Stripes need to be more mottled, look at the apprentices for comparison. <span style="">01:36, 02/11/2016

Reuploaded x2 07:53, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

The berries should be like pink, red, blue, purple, not green. That's probably wicked nitpicky but eh. Nice job on this. <span style="">19:32, 02/11/2016

The berries are fine ... green berries exist in the wild. 19:54, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Additionally you could probably portray those as leaves on a twig if you wanted to :P  <span style="">20:46 Thu Feb 11 

Define face shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:33, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Acorn Fur (MC) ~CBA
14:39, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

could you darken the cheek shading a tad?— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:32, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded that's about as dark as I'll go, considering it's the same darkness as the rest of the shading. 18:56, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define the stomach shading. 13:43, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 18:42, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 19:55, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Littlecloud (MC) - For Approval
All colors from the previous images.

can you curve the stripes a little more near his side and back. They look a little pointy and when I look at the older image they were a bit more curved.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The stripes don't need to match 100%, as this is a different side of the image. Plus, it's kinda hard to curve them anymore than they already are without redoing the pattern. I'd also like to mention that the MC image was at a different angle.

Can you possibly smudge the shading some more, and expand the shading on the stomach and bag leg and tail. 13:44, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't see why I'd need to smudge the shading anymore, so unless you can eloborate why, I'd rather not. The tail shading, I didn't touch if only for the fact I'd like a second opinion (don't agree just to agree; I hate that so much), since I don't want to make it too thick.

Tail shading's fine. <span style="">16:56, 02/12/2016

No it's no. It's too thin. Can you please expand thr shading. It's very thin. 18:31, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

It goes halfway across the tail... that's not thin at all. That's average for tail shading on the images that I've seen posted on this page so far.

Redscar (MC) - CBA
needed to do more patterns other than solid so <span style="">21:55, 02/9/2016

CBA?

Brackenheart (MC) - For Approval
I love this design. <span style="">22:22 Tue Feb 9

Don't forget to crop the image. 23:50, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">16:55 Wed Feb 10

Smooth out the shading a little on the legs and chest. Very pretty! 01:26, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Beautiful job! :) The other images don't have the stripe extending from his forehead to his nose, so remove that.

Ravenwing (MC) ~ For Approval
No idea how to crop this so I'll do it in the next upload 11:06, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tum, and smooth the shoulder shading. Also, define the shading on the hind legs and tail. <span style="">20:19, 02/10/2016

Goosefeather (MC) ~ For Approval
thanks to Icy for uploading. Lysandre's battle theme is a great motivator. <span style="">21:54 Wed Feb 10

Define the shading on the face, Who knew team flare could motivate, ps this is lovely! 23:36, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Could you make the ragged fur lineart gray, like it is on the elder and StarClan images? 03:49, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Is that like...a rule that we have now...? When I tweaked the medicine cat ages ago that wasn't a thing. I don't see the point in having it grey. <span style="">05:55 Thu Feb 11

The lineart should be black anyways. Why is it gray on his other images????

darken the right ears earpink.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 17:12, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Earpink is fine Mink <span style="">19:28, 02/11/2016

Pearnose (MC) - For Approval
Idk. 01:20, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Hawkheart (MC) ~ For Approval
 <span style="">18:51 Thu Feb 11 

Define the black dapples? <span style="">13:01, 02/12/2016

reups  <span style="">14:43 Fri Feb 12 

define the grey and texture. 17:49, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:31, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MC) ~ For Approval
yellfang 20:30, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading, gorgeous! 21:47, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:22, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

I'm laughing yellowfang is litearlly saying "i have had ENOUGH" also can you define the tail shading? 13:25, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

She is glorious, you have done her beautifully but could you define the flat muzzle more? 17:12, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded thats as flat as you're gonna get it. 17:46, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt MC 2) - For Approval
- well, I tried... 08:00, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hind leg closest to us and raised front paw? <span style="">19:15, 02/12/2016

Frecklewish (Alt MC) - For Approval
- there's something not quite right, but I'm not entirely sure what... 08:00, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Add a little depth to the shading on the tum and define the earpink? Also, define the light on the tail and legs? <span style="">19:14, 02/12/2016

Runningnose (Alt MC) - For Approval
Insanely proud of this, tbh. I figure since he's got patchy fur, I could improvise. His alt has yellow eyes, so I kept that, since as far as I know, he doesn't have a cited eye color...and I don't think I need to match the eye color his normal images have.

Nice! :D Define face and belly shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:38, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is a very evil pattern.

Bellapaw (App) - For Approval
Not sure I matched the shading/texture totally, I might redo that later. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:36, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Wait whoa, the colors don't match at all... what colors did you use, Shinx? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:38, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

In all honesty, I think this is what it should look like; the loner's colours clash too much, and this still matches the desc of pale orange... But that's up to you and Shinx to decide I think? I'd go with these though, to match Firestar more, and still have it match her desc. Also, could you smooth the shading on the chin? <span style="">19:12, 02/12/2016