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Shellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
How do you charart. . . lol. I'm aware the shading needs smoothing out, but I'll fix it later.

re-up I tried.

Smooth out the head shading, define the tail shading, and add some lighting to --> front leg and paw. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:14, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I'll try to see what I can do for --> leg and paw shading. (yeah this is why kit shading sucks)

That looks better. :) Smooth out the shading on the forehead, and define the tail shading. Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 16:18, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Can you define the light on the tail?

Dovewing (Q) - For Approval
I'm proud with this! 00:47, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste outside of the <- side of the tail, and I believe the shading is leaking on the belly. Also, could you smooth out the shading? 00:57, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's also leaking on the tail, and can you define the shading on all legs?

Reuploaded The shading isn't leaking, it's just the pale parts. 01:29, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

the tint looks a bit too neon, and the shading is a bit flat. 01:30, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:00, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

still looks too neon, so maybe darken the tint 02:18, 9/05/2017

Looks nice! maybe define the shading depth and smooth it out a little? 03:39, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking on the belly. 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

This looks really pretty! Maybe define the eye depth?

Smooth out the shading on the front left (our left) leg, and define/darken the shading on the face? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:15, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Patch and Snek! :P 23:28, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the shading tint is too pink or something in my opinion. Maybe desaturate it a bit or make it more to the less neon side? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:07, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:47, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Star) - CBA
Hopefully this new cord I'm getting for my tablet helps until my new one comes. This was fun to do. Although I know the smudging is weird. I'll fix that as soon as I have a functional tablet (RIP 6 year old one) 01:21 Tue Sep 5

Define the shading on the front legs? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:36, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

the stripes look too dark. they're just the same colour as the pely, set on mutiply. the paleparts on the tail should also take up much more. 18:51, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Recede/smooth out the shading a little bit on the right side of the belly? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:19, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:56 Thu Sep 7

CBA?

Crowfeather (De) ~ For Approval
Wow.. bad dad is deputy. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

define the texture 04:36, 9/05/2017

Re-uploaded. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:41, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe make the pale parts look more... idk,, they look as if they're made with chalk on the other images, i guess? Make them rougher maybe?? If anyone else could throw in their opinion or reword what I said, that'd be great.

It might just be my laptop but maybe blur the shading on the muzzle? And perhaps tone down the tint a bit?

The shading on the belly looks lighter than on other parts of the body, maybe darken/define it a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:24, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope I got everything you guys says. The shading on the belly was the same as the chest n other parts. Hope it's okay now. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:42, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

i can rant on for days about this piece of -censored- being the deputy, but anyways, would you like the file for the warrior/kit?

Sure! Send it to cometandcosmo@yahoo.com. Thanks! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 16:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Shadowkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Back at it folks. ✌🏾

Smooth out the tail shading and define the shading depth there as well? 00:36, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the chest a lot more too nice work 00:37, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

uh pretty sure danny posted this, so uh...? <span style="">00:37, 9/06/2017

jay was having trouble uploading this from mobile so they sent it to me and i uploaded it for them.

I'll take care of the comments in a sec. but winter are you actually assuming that I posted Danny's art? Thanks for assuming good faith.

Reuploaded thanks for the help with that Danny. And sorry I snapped earlier, I was just tired.

Hm, the only thing I can see here is maaaaybe define the facial shading just a tad? But even then, it's more the shading on the top of the head.... these blanks are so tiny.

So I tried as you suggested, Jayce, but it didn't make much of a difference on these StarClan cursed blanks. I'll end up reuploading later, after work.

Reups Not too happy with the eyes but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Ant (Lo) ~ For Approval
17:28, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

This is really, really great Sziri! Define the light on the head and define ear pink? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:08, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Aww,thanks 16:32, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Forgot the cheek-scars 12:51, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Fuzzball (KP) ~ For Approval
FUZZBALL

smooth out the shading on the head 20:41, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dunno if that made a difference - there's ginger on the top of the head that makes it look a lot sharper than it is.

does he have a special collar that isn't listed on his page? because I don't think we can just alter lineart like that. 08:48, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

agreeing with skt. unless theyre cited with a special collar, lineart editing is not allowed. <span style="">22:03, 9/07/2017

Reuploaded Sorry about that; I suppose I envisioned him with a bowtie. I was going to upload after just skt had commented, but schoolwork got me busy

personally I liked the bowtie but ;~; maybe define the depth on the back and tail just a bit ? 09:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Floyd (Ro) - For Approval
I forgot to add the mange to his pelt, and I'm probably gonna tweak the shading a fair bit on the next upload, but oh well. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:40, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

does he have eyelashes? <span style="">01:45, 9/07/2017

Define all leg shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:14, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be a patch of brown that is darker than the rest by the shoulder. 21:53, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

p sure thats shading <span style="">22:02, 9/07/2017

Reuploaded. Yeah, it's just shading on the shoulder that makes that bit of fur look darker. I added mange, changed the eyes to amber (I meant to change them, they were only green 'cause I was using my old file for Dawn Mist's rogue image, which was also why there were eyelashes, which I've now removed), and defined the leg shading. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:10, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

did ya forget the mange? 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Lightkit (Kt) ~ For Approval
I made Tigerstar's (her grandrandfather) color and Tigerclaw's (her father) stripes (+ eyes).

This looks great! Define ear pink a bit?

Reuploaded

Reuploaded

This is really pretty! There's an unfilled pixel on the lower ---> haunch fluff right above the back paw. 01:32, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Tuna (Ro) - For Approval
Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading <span style="">21:36, 9/07/2017

Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading

Renamed.

Define the shading a bit on the front leg furthest from us, and the light on the front leg closest to us. 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

think you can make the shading by the hind leg curve a bit? it looks add cutting right across the thigh. 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Blaze (Ki) ~ For Approval
Whoa, sorry for disappearing. School started up and I became busy. Here's Blaze. Not too pleased with his stripes. 01:29, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

could you lighten up the shading just a tick? 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Hm, I think if Vec smooths out the shading a bit, she might not have to lighten the shading...

Reups Doesn't look like much of a difference on these tiny blanks, but I can lighten it if it's still too dark. 02:01, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

i think the shading is still too dark. also, try and make the stripes curve more, they look like straight lines across the blank.

Reups 21:15, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Peanut (Q) ~ For Approval
In the midst of the chaos of junior year, have another fat cat from yours truly

also I'll remove the scars later, this was one of my many OC images

Re-uploaded there

Did you colorpick from an actual peanut? cause that's what the lighter color looks like omg. Also, could you define the shading/light on <-- back leg?

Pouncekit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 10:57, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Tone down the tint on the shading a little bit?(sobs I was gonna grab this one)

What do you mean, tone down the tint? The shading is black. Do you mean lighten it? 14:04, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah sorry that's what i meant. I just woke up and im not making much sense.

Hm, I think if she lightens it, especially given how the texture hides some of the shading, it might not be a good idea. That being said, could you define the light on both front legs?

Reuploaded. 14:16, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Growler (Ro) - For Approval
Gonna tweak that tail pattern later on so the tail doesn't look so gray...

Smooth out the patches a bit; they seem a tad hard-edged. 15:17, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

The effect was intentional. The patches on Jayie's image above has the patches at just about the same roughness as mine. Snookthorn also has some pretty hard-edged patches as well.

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Did some stuff.

dang it i was gonna grab this one, welp, can you define the shading on the front leg closest to us? 20:43, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Ajax (KP) - For Approval
ahaha i might lighten the shading... 17:07, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you? He looks tri-colored and I was really confused as to his pelt color for a minute...

Re-uploaded. i lightened it, and changed the tint. i might redo it. I also tried putting little dinosaurs on his color, but idk if you can tell what they are. 20:17, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

he looks a little gray right now, mind lightening him up a bit?

Berryheart (Lo) ~ For Approval
First image as a warrior! :D Also, you gotta love this girl. <3 19:51, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Streak (Ro) ~ For Approval
You could imagine how sick I was of smudging the shading after I finished it. 21:31, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Spiresight (Lo) ~ For Approval
i have two different monitors and they are showing me two different colours >:( 21:35, September 8, 2017 (UTC)