Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feet shading still needs to be darkened. 00:26 Tue Nov 15

Oh, and she needs a torn ear as well. 00:34 Tue Nov 15

One thing, with highlights I just really can't use them without having bad shading. I will try to blur the shading, but I hope everyone can understand that highlights are bad for the chararts I make. 03:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I guess it's better now...

Make the ear nick a little thicker. 05:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The paws still need to be darkened. Just to clarify, right now they're lighter than the rest of the legs and that makes pretty much no sense with the current light source (or what appears to be the current light source). They need to match the colour at the top of the legs if not be darker than that. 04:50 Wed Nov 16

Reuploaded. 01:31, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Timberfur (D) - Redone
I'm surprised no-one re-did him yet. Original artist was Mousetalon, and he needed to be longhaired. 18:34, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make him greying? It says in his page that he is. 18:47, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't sure if his whole body was greying, so I just added a greying muzzle. 18:54, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'd maybe define the muzzle more and maybe make it lighter. 00:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:19, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pupil? 02:43, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

There's a pupil >_>. There was a discussion about it, and it was agreed this eye style was okay. 02:52, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the earpink. 00:23 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded 01:24, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to be lightened a tad so it matches the warrior. Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:47, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was thinking the same thing. I made him duller also, since he's greying. 18:01, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Archeye (W) - Tweaked
I dont know if its redone or tweaked, I redoned stripes and shadings.. OA was Insaneular.. Leaf-storm,14:11,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Ups, changes arent showing Leaf-storm,14:13,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Why is the lineart in between his haunch and his tail gone? 16:08, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That's the old version. 16:21, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

i dont like when changes arent showing Leaf-storm,16:48,November 13,2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list, but could you make the ear-pink less purple. 22:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was on the list Leaf-storm,12:57,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Reupladed, late, sorry I wasn't on my computer before Leaf-storm,13:38,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and shading. 00:21 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded, 15:15,November 15,2011 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be darker, and darken the highlights/shading on the haunch or brighten the highlights/lighten the shading on the shoulder. Blur the stripes as well. 04:52 Wed Nov 16

Also dull the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:39, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste in the triangle where the haunch and the paws are separated. Also, near the front paws. 21:34, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,10:12,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) - Tweaked
Blurred shadings and added some more, OA is Bramble Leaf-storm,14:53,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the shading on her paws. 16:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:30,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the neck shading and lighten the shading on the middle of the haunch. Blur all shading. 22:59 Sun Nov 13

Next comment will be blur the shadings more yes? I do it..but I dont have much time now Leaf-storm,13:46,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload the image? Also, try to match the shading to this tutorial about shading 'cause right now the shading doesn't make much sense. 00:18 Tue Nov 15

I make it tomorrow because on this computer I have hight brightness and I cant see the shadings correctly. 19:58,November 15,2011 (UTC)

Free time! Yes! It looks really bad, sorry 10:23,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
Added longer tail. Original artist was Sandy, redone by Scarlet. Comments? Elorisa  18:24, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks a little odd... When I added it to the list, I pictured it being expanded at the middle, so that it was roughly the same shape, but longer. Make sense? 18:28, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded; Better? ''' Elorisa   18:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, perfect :) 18:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip of the tail a bit pointier and erase the waste around the tail. 22:45 Sun Nov 13

Leafpool (Ki)- Redone
She needed to match the other images... OA was Darkhallows. Constructiments? 19:32, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her paws a bit. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 00:36, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:24, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes just a bit. Me lufs this. 05:13, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

One side of the earpink seems to be darker, but if it's not, ignore me. And..the soft white chest....*steals* Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 22:51, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) ~ Redone
Needed long hair and OA was Icethroat21. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:00, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

You need to upload it over Dawnflower's elder image, I believe. :3 22:23, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Debating whether I should do that or not when I was uploading it... I'll switch it right now. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   23:38, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and lighten the haunch shading. 01:09, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

And redden the earpink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink">Spring...✿ 01:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading and fixed the haunch shading and reddened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   02:01, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pink looks hot pink-ish. 17:25, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:05, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller. 00:13, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done :P M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:00, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (E) - Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Spottedwing, then I'm guessing Nightfall101 tweaked it. Comments? 20:41, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, if any. 21:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink, please. :3 Awesome! 02:09, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink larger and more triangular. <span style="">00:08 Thu Nov 17

Darken the shading - 01:18, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Guardian, the shading doesn't need to be darker. It's fine. Okay, since Snowy sorta left, is anyone else going to work on this, or should we decline it? 17:07, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mosskit (Alt. Ki) - Redone
Needed to be dark grey instead of teal. OA was Sandy. 21:38, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think Mosskit was also described as a tom for this description. Give her a gray nose, slightly darker than her pelt color. Blur the chest and leg shading more. 22:22, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit. 00:32, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Her nose is pink in her description. Speaking of which, would I be allowed to just change her kit's nose to pink? I don't really think that warrants a tweak. 03:39, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, you can change noses, eyes, waste, and miscolored lineart without putting it up for approval Iceheart said. This is great! ^^ Could you dull the nosepink a bit though/ Maybe around the same color as the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:12, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:49, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes(R) - redone
I apologize if it looks as if it was smudged by a monkey. The stripes needed to be redone and darker and so did the shading. OA=Hawkfire - 01:55, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

It all seems...pixlated? Perhaps blur it on an extrememly low rate. Also, blur the earpink a bit... Amazing! *steals* ;) 02:07, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the face, chest, ear, and back paw almost look white. Do you think you could darken the base pelt ever so slightly? *is awed* 03:31, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, darken it quite a bit. XD It looks lighter than most of my white cats I've made. XD But this IS amazing! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:31, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- My work has mesmerized all of you as usual. Oh, and I couldnt blur th stripes because everytime they come out overblurred - 01:43, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) - Tweaked
This pretty much looks redone, but I DID tweak it. :P The white was placed in unnatural places, the patches needed to be smudged, and the shading needed to be defined. Ugh, I suck at torties. DX Anyways, OA was -Bracken I think. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:10, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. <span style="">00:11 Thu Nov 17

Pinestar (KP) - Tweaked
Yay for tearing ears! OA was Nightfall. 03:56, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. I liek the ear 8D <span style="">04:55 Wed Nov 16

Re-uploaded. I made it worse D: 22:35, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Raggedstar (L) ~ Redone
OA is Sandy, with a slight tweak from Iceheart. Comments? 01:28, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

The bit of fur near the tip of his tail looks a bit awkward. Could you smooth it out a touch? 01:38, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

He's cross-eyed xD Make the highlights in his eyes be either on the left or right sides. 01:56, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:02, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink into the ear a tiny bit? 20:35, November 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 20:44, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
I'm the OA, and I felt I could have done much better with the stripes than I originally did. I got permission from Scarlet to do this. Comments? 05:25, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is much better. xD Define the ear pink - I'm having trouble seeing it. 05:29, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:51, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add grey paws, since he was described with them? 21:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Different book, different rank. I believe he was either a kit or an apprentice at that point. 21:20, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Since we don't know, maybe add a TINT of gray? This is awesome! 22:08, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

The grey paws were in Eclipse I think, and as a kit. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:46, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that was the book he became an apprentice. He definitely wasn't a warrior at that point. 00:14, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rainsplash (D) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading to make it darker. OA was Sandy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 16:59, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blu rthe ear pink a bit. <span style="">22:10 Thu Nov 17

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud (E)- Tweaked
Shading tweak. OA is Sandstar12.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 21:29, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <span style="">22:13 Thu Nov 17

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (W) - Redone
Layered the warrior lineart over the original. It's bad, bad, bad. Those tail stripes are really bugging me... Anyway, comments? 21:47, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and OA is Dawnfeather. 21:47, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! I wish I could do this good at chararts! Blur the ear pink. And make it a little bit bigger, <span style="">22:06 Thu Nov 17

It's the exact same earpink as the deputy. 22:08, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's the same colour as the deputy, but shouldn't it be more like Russetfur's colour? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:10, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that? 22:25, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (D) - Tweaked
He needed a scar on his shoulder. 22:35, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scar a little. <span style="">23:54 Thu Nov 17

Isn't this your fourth? You already are doing Pinestar (KP), Mosskit (K), and Rowanclaw (W)... Correct me if I'm wrong. 00:55, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Graystripe (W) - Tweaked
I took the colours from the deputy image, and copied the torn ear exactly. Original artist is Sandstar(?), and I was supposed to blur the shading, but just re-did it, and it needed to have a torn ear. Comments? 22:58, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

One side of the torn ear has thicker lineart. <span style="">23:52 Thu Nov 17

I don't think it really matters, it's a torn ear anyways. 00:24, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Did you have permission...? 00:34, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Want me to ask right now? :) 01:01, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was hollyberry; redone to be reddish brown. I took all colors from Oakheart, so I am not changing any colors. 00:11, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does the red part of his description mean that he needs stripes? :\ 00:13, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

He's red-brown, which is the same as reddish brown. Oakheart and Pinestar are reddish browna nd they don't need stripes, so I'm not adding stripes. 00:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)