Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Tallstar (R) ~ Redone
OA was me. redone to match official art

the belly on the deputy only seems to be on >> this side of the image, with black being under the front arms?

can you add some shading on the << front paw and smooth it on the >> front paw?

Re-uploaded

Could you recede the white patch just slightly where it's right on the top of the haunch? It almost overlaps/touches where the tail starts, and the deputy doesn't show the two almost touch and all

The white needs to be removed from the back (cat's) right paw, according to the official description 23:28, 10/18/2019

Depending on what gets done with the nomination, he might not need any white paws. Please do not archive or make changes until the nomination is said and done. ​​

Tigerstar (TPB) (K) ~ Redone


I think the stripes could match a bit more to Bramblestar’s kit, plus this needs the pale colours around the eyes and on the very light one on the muzzle.

Re-uploaded

Stripes still don't really match on the legs from what I can see - so here's a flat version of bramble's kit without shading to show where the stripe placement is.

Re-uploaded

Comparing this with the flat version that Max has for Bramblekit, the stripes still don't match. The dorsal stripe has four paler areas on the tail itself, whereas yours only has two (and three bigger stripes). The pattern itself is thinner on the kit as well.

The dorsal stripe shouldn't be on the shoulder, either. 16:23, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Re-uploaded yes

The stripes still look vastly different from the image Max provided; it needs to be stripe placement by stripe placement. What I did for Hawk's, I traced the stripes on Bramble's kit and worked from there. 01:42, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

Flaxfoot (K) - Redone
i might fix this and the apprentice up later on so it doesn't look like trash

23:11, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

There is a line of waste or something else in front of the head. -- 23:15, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

Flaxfoot (App) - Redone
23:11, November 11, 2019 (UTC)