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Runningnose(MC) ~ Redone


Was told to redo. Ew...Comments?... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons, and make the ear pink bigger. 02:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, the patches... Try looking at Spiderstar for what patches ought to look like on short-furred cats. And could you go back to the old pattern? I'd rather not have to redo the MCA unless absolutely necessary. 02:29, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, define the shading so it actually shows up on the white, please. 02:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please go back to the old pattern. Redoing doesn't necessarily mean changing the pattern. There's no reason to redo his other images. Anyways, darken the gray to match and darken the shading all together. 18:30, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, me and another SM chat (not gonna mention names unless she tells me to) think this should be auto-declined, as it's not 80% complete. 20:25, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

It's at least over 50%. Maple, you have a week from the upload date (2:08 AM Wikitime on the 23rd) to get this over 80% before it's declined. 21:45, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maple, are you working on this or not? 04:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

No i'm not, 'cause of the car wreck, im spending so much time in and out of hosspitals, and only have one arm...i cant work on this, 'yall, i'm sorry. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 01:07, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

If this is up for grabs for people to take over, I will. 05:50, 27, 02, 2012

Sorry to hear about that, Maple. Okay, DJ, you go ahead and take over. 12:46, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

DJ, are you going to work on this? 17:46, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Actually I won't, sorry guys. Just due to the limited acess I have on the wiki these days, I don't exactly have the time. :c 06:12, 01, 03, 2012

Oooh oooh I'll take it! 8D *goes to reserve* 07:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - This was so much fun. XD Went a bit overboard with the nose, but I think it should be fine. And bleh, those patches..... x.x But meh. XD Comments? 07:17, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely <3. Darken the haunch shading. 12:01, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oohh, this is beautiful <3 Blur the earpink. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 15:47, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the shading a bit. Much better. 20:36, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but can you just make the nose a bit more subtle like his other images? xD If not, its fine. ;3  20:48, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Redone
First elder for me. ._. 03:06, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 03:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad and make it more triangular. c: If ya use highlights, tone them down a tad, otherwise just blur the shading like Cloudy said. *Is stupid Dx* Sky Promises, promises  06:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Maple? 20:44, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (W) ~ Tweaked
Blurred the highlights, fixed blurred lineart, and eye wasn't in depth. OA was Ashshadow with a tweak from Atelda, I think. (This is my first tweak so please tell me if I'm doing this right.) 19:12, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around. 01:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:59, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Also, I fixed the heading for you. 02:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't match his description at the moment. It says he's a dark grey tom, and now he looks like a light grey one. :3 When I nominated it, I was told to redo the colour too. 02:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Cinder? 18:20, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (W) - Redone
Modified triangle tabby or something. x.x OA = Ashshadow with a tweak by Sweetflower. Sky Promises, promises 03:33, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Amazing, Sky dear! :3 Define the tail shading? 05:21, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tail shading on short hairs. >:U Sky Promises, promises 05:30, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. Also, agreed on the tail shading. 'tis a pain in the "add", if you catch my point. ;) 05:56, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ha. Add. Sky Promises, promises 06:34, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, it's blindingly bright pink. I love this <3. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Howzis? Sky Seedlit Proxy  23:27, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Redone
I don't know if changes are showing, he needed to bbe redone to match apperntice image. OA = Bramble. 22:17, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. 02:05, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded.' 01:52, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) - Tweaked
I personally think it needed to be tweaked more for the shading, but the stripe needed to be defined. OA is Evanphoto, with a tweak by Appledash. 05:54, 27, 02, 2012

Can you blur the shading a bit on his chest? 09:53, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I was going to get this... I nominated him. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:04, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the part of the stripe thats on his tail. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's some blank pixels in his torn ear. 23:25, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I don't like the shading on this, and transperant pixels are annoying. =P 09:36, 28, 02, 2012

I don't suppose there's any way to blur the shading on the front? It looks like a continuation of his stripe. •_• Sky Promises, promises  09:39, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripe on his tail more. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle thingy. <333 20:59, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried! D=< (DJ not signed in) 59.101.229.253 06:28, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Crowfeather (K) ~ Redone
Who's a cute little kit? Crowfeather is! Shading needed to be redone and the highlights were too think, so it was said to be a redo. OAs were QuailflightTheCat, Sandstar12, and Iceheart22. Tried a different shading style; will fix if recommended. 21:39, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose black/gray. ^^ Cute~ 21:41, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Cute little grumpy WindClan cat 83 Enlarge and define the earpink, and possibly put his eye colour over top of the shading if it isn't, so it don't get lost in the shading. Sky Promises, promises 23:20, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

No offense, but the shading looks rather flat. 23:23, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:59, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 20:03, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading; it looks very flat. Sunny frost  21:53, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is defined to the max. 22:18, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think what they mean is expand the chest highlight and the face highlight so we can see the neck shading. 14:33 Thu Mar 1

Sagepaw (Alt. Ki) - Redone
The changes may or may not be showing. OA Was Goldenpaw, and, it was a triangle tabby. Comment-o's? :P 23:18, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:36, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Wasn't he described as a she-cat at this point and time? 15:52, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeppers. I just checked. Nice catch. 21:02, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink ~ 21:20, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (MC) - Redone
Redid the stripes so I guess this could be considered a tweak, but you can hardly tell. I'm also tempted to give him a white chest, cause on google images, a lot of gray tabbies are shown with white or pale chests. OA was Icecould and then I redid it 03:45, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

This is so purty <333 Enlarge the 'highlight' on the haunch. 03:50 Tue Feb 28 03:50, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye Sir! 03:54, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more and maybe desaturate it a bit? 13:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should give him a pale chest C:. Blur the highlight/lighter part on the tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:09, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Elo. Go ahead and see what it looks like. Also, blur the ear pink. 21:01, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. C: Sky Promises, promises 21:34, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't really like the pale chest idea much any more cause it'd mean I have that I'd have to redo the stripes. 22:46, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think you could put the pale chest under the stripes layer, and shorten the chest stripes a little bit? 04:04, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
I seem to attract solid gray chararts. This definitely isn't my best. Comments? OA was Echomist. Just a shading tweak. 20:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

What needed to be done, and who was the OA? Also, define the ear pink. 21:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:51, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Moonflower (W) ~ Redone
Moonflower <33 Redone because it was a triangle tabby. OA was Bramble with a tweak/redo by Leggy. Join.me w00t! Comments? 00:30 Wed Feb 29 00:30, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Holy craappppp..... O.o Darken the shading a touch and just my opinion, maybe make the stripes a pixel or two thicker. 00:54, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Woah. Blur the stripes just the tiniest bit. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  01:12, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dude. •_• Blur the tail shading. Sky Promises, promises 01:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. <3333  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 01:20, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8DDD Thank you all so much 03:05 Wed Feb 29

I watched you make it. 8D <3 Can you lighten the shading on the farthest (from us) hindpaw just a little bit? 03:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies Ivy You helped me so much <333 04:30 Wed Feb 29

Can you blur the stripes just a tad? Looks great! ^^ 20:06, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Wow....this is incredible!!! Just darken the earpink a little, and it'll be perfect! Sunny frost  21:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much 8D I'd rather not blur the stripes anymore though. 00:03 Thu Mar 1

Define the shading? 01:34, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:54 Thu Mar 1

Redstar (L) - Redone
Stripes needed to be redone <3 OA was Hawktalon, with a redo by Cloudy, and a tweak by moi. 02:52, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Add some stripes on this <--- flank and some shading at the bottom please! 03:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Ah, to see such a crappy image redone. It fills my heart with joy~ 8D 03:29, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the white muzzle and paws. False reference :3 03:32, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:05, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful~ 8D 20:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. (SO BEAUTIFUL~) Sunny  frost  22:07, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit? c: Sky Seedlit Proxy 22:43, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky, I refuse to thicken the stripes. They're thin and I like them c: 04:24, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink <3  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 15:39, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger. 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Shiningheart (W) ~ Redone
Fail. Dx OA was Insane, with a redo by Scarlet. Stripes were unrealistic/triangle tabby, and needed a redo. I hope the black stripes are fine, because the previous image had 'em. Comments? 06:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, stop, this is not a fail. I love it! <3 Define the shading, please? 15:06, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Pfff. Stoney, this is amazing! Blur the shading on the paws. :3 20:01, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't try defining the shading too much, or it would look black. Also, I have the shading blurred to the max. 06:11, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dustpelt (A) - Redone
To match the warrior. Comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 21:53, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Redo/fix the earpink. It looks like some parts of it are darker than others :S Sunny  frost  22:05, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define it's pale chest. Pretty Elo ^^ 23:44 Wed Feb 29

'''Reuploaded.  -- Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 23:05, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (Alt. SC) ~ Redone
I love this blank. XD And this is probably the only time I'll ever use it for the project, too. D: Anyway, she's a bullseye tabby! I'll take out the white if anyone wants me to, it's based on personal preference. Comments? 22:11, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, the white chest is fine. Blur the stripes on the haunch a bit. Beautiful Shelly <333 23:45 Wed Feb 29

Could you blur the stripes just a tad..<3 Nice job Shelly!! 01:31, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Moonflower (Q) ~ Redone
I feel lame for no having done a queen yet. OA was Bracken- with a nose and eye fix by Ivy. This thing looks like it was highlighted on O.o I swear it wasn't I'm innocent D8 Comments? 00:09 Thu Mar 1

Lighten up the shading a bit. 8D Sky Seedlit Proxy 01:21, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

That's because you are lame. ;) Jsut blur the stripes on her face a tiny bit so I can differentiate between them and her facial features. 01:35, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Be quiet, I can spell shirt >:D 01:39 Thu Mar 1

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (RC) (E) - Redone
Original artist was Minnowclaw, with a redo by Scarletwind. The stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 22:21, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

The brown stripe at the end of the tail is very hard-edged, please blur/smudge it. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:26, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Frisk (Ki) - Tweaked
Yeah, gross. Maybe I should have redone it. x.x Sky Seedlit Proxy  23:20, March 1, 2012 (UTC)