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Larkwing (MC) ~ Redone
Original artist was Dawnfeather; redone as a shorthair. Comments? 22:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Do you think you could add a stripes in the area that's above her belly and in between her front arm and hanch? Also, there's a few miscolored pixils below her whiskers that are colored green. 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 22:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Ivystripe, but I couldn't add another stripe without ruining the shading, so I just made the other stripe longer. 23:06, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be more silver. Just seems like dark gray tabby right now. 23:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add a couple more stripes as well. 00:24, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Add shading to the herbs. 01:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes towards the base. It looks odd being blurred at the tips, but not quite as blurry at the base of the lineart. 20:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. Looks good Mistystar! :D 11:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe...sorry, but this already went through 36 hours without comments. Re-Uploaded, can this be archived? 21:51, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know, I'm very, very impatient. But, can someone archive this? ;D 23:07, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's not ready. I don't like how the stripes fade out and add a lot more stripes. 23:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I added stripes before, but cats don't necessarily have that many stripes. Besides, other chararts that didn't look ready were approved before just for going through 24 hours, so I don't see why this one shouldn't. Not everyone has the same artistic views...I'll try to add more stripes, but I like it with the stripes fading out. 23:14, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

There, add a lot more stripes. Does it look better now? 23:23, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the pixels of stripes that...aren't stripes. 00:28, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What's a stripe that isn't a stripe? Can you add a redline or something? 00:31, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was hard to understand. What I meant to say was that there were black pixels that went into the pelt color - could you erase those? 00:33, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, thats a lot easier to understand. xD 00:37, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes may not be showing. 00:39, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Now darken the shading. After you do that, I'll archive this. 19:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.' 23:29, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and blur the earpink. Other than that, I see nothing wrong. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 16:11, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:43, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

And lighten the shading a little on the chest. 17:43, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I was told to darken it. I'll lighten a bit. Re-Uploaded. 00:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) - Redone
I think it's too smudged. It needed petal shaped patches, and I redid the coloring so it didn't look multi-colored instead of tortoiseshell. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, the orignal artist was Icestorm. You don't mind if I continue to work on this Icestorm do you? ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well....I didn't see the problem before.... 21:52, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

If you mean the original image by "before" it was on the tweak list for petal shaped patches. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

It is. Lighten the shading, and blur the patches. 21:56, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but did it really require to be re-done? 21:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- no, but adding the patches would've meant adding shading and highlights, and they were all around. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add a pixel for her eye color below her white. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sucks to have your images randomly redone doesnt it Icy? Make the yellow more ginger. 23:14, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white chest, it's starting to look grayish. 23:41, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, it looks better than my first image anyways. I just wanted to know why, I didn't see it on the Tweak List. xD 00:26, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, that was uncalled for. Also, Icestorm, it's been on the tweaking list for a while now. Lighten the shading/darken it so all the white fur matches. It seems the feet are lighter then everything else. 13:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't check xD Darken the shading 19:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I really suck at tortoiseshells XP. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:05, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make it a bit more red? The yellow i mean. 00:30, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks really awesome! Blur the ear pink a tad bit more. 02:40, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- does the orange look okay? I had to make sure the sponge didn't saturate anything else. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 16:07, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The orange looks fine. Darken/redden the earpink a bit though. 17:01, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks Poppypelt! ^^ ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:51, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chedst shading and tail shading. It looks better than mine. =P 13:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks Icestorm, but I don't think this is that good. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 18:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh please. Lighten the tail shading at the base of the tail. 12:04, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make another white patch on her tail on the (our) left side but have the lineart cut it off? (I hope you know where I mean) because it looks mostly black. Wonderful job! 17:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks. But I think I made the white look odd. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Tweaked
Original artist was Elorisa. I basically just darkened the stripes and the shading. Comments? 22:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could basically re-do the stripes? They're bothering me. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then that would basically be redoing the whole thing, right? ... and darken the tail shading. 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Um, no, it would just be re-doing the stripes... 00:25, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

But redoing the stripes would mean erasing the stripes, and then adding stripes, and adding shading again, even if you used layers, the shading would have to be redone...whatever. 00:27, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What's with all the hostility lately? Define the shading a little more. 00:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Then the shading could be re-done, if possible. 00:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me :). But I'm not much help with this, I'm the original artist xD. Lighten the stripes a tad, they seem really dark :3. Looks great, Dapplecloud! Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, can you make that large circly stripe on the chest less circlish? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (W)- Tweaked


Here he is, Clawface was approved, so i took him over, OA was Maplefern, and I made him more mottled, cause, his 'mottles' looked liked shading done wrong. So comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:25, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Looks a lot better. Blur the shading, add shading to the head, and redden the earpink. 23:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the dark lines by the lineart. 23:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- What else, Thanks, Misty :) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail some more? 23:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- anything else? I am really fond of this image ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:02, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading. 00:11, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I lightend the shading a touch, then blurred, what else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:38, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Look at the front legs... is it me, or do they look a little...awkward? It seems there's some misplaced colour or something? I have no idea, but, it just seems weird. 13:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Did i fix it?.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Still a little bit on the front paw, but, I won't complain. It looks much better now. 22:46, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. It makes him look almost black. 03:35, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! I've been waiting so long for this image to be fixed! Maybe add a little dark gray or a mottle to his ear farthest away from us, it looks bare and plain. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫  12:23, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's way too dark. 21:10, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I redid the shading, look better, or should I darken it? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:25, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more and add more shading to the haunch, back, and chest. 02:17, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm doing hidhlights from the back, so no shading on his back. Reuploaded -Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and brigten the highlights. 19:13, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Curve the shading on his haunch, it'll make it look more natural. 17:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (KP) - Redone
Finally got batteries for my mouse, so I can work on this! Original artist was Nightshine. He needed to match his leader version. Comments for improvement? 03:03, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I died from awesomeness. 8D define the earpink and blur the pale belly -- 03:06, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the back again. I died from the awesomeness. I'm now a ghost. 03:07, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to say define the shading on the tail too. Imma ghost too, BOO -- 03:09, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and thanks, really x3 The last comment I didn't get before I reuploaded, so hang on Done 03:11, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

There's some gray below the base of the tail. Nvm. 03:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and make the nose the same color as it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:08, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

All the colors were taken from his leader image. 04:28, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, alright then. Just center the earpink then. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:58, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to mention that I reuploaded this 00:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Shorten the earpink, blur it a tad, and blurr the shading too. -- 01:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Shorten what part of the earpink? The top or the bottom? 02:27, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

The bottom :P Sorry bout that -- 02:28, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ok done 02:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (D) Tweaked
Original Artist was Icestorm, and it just needed to be lightened :) 00:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Theres some unneeded earpink on the other ear XD -- 00:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, that's suppose to be there. His description says he has a scar behind one of his ears :P 00:49, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden/make it dark gray the scar, make the ear-pink a tad smaller, and darken the shading a tad more. This is looking good. 01:17, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looking better. Can you blur the haunch shading a tad?

Reuploaded. Blurred :P 04:23, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a tad? 21:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:34, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Jake (KP)~ Redone
I told myself after Shrewtooth I'd never do another kp, but hes my thrid one. Couldnt get the shading to look normal and dont really like the light coming from the front. OA was Mosswhisker. 02:13, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, I kinda wanted to do this one. XD Oh well. :P I've got plenty I can do. XD Anyways, looks great! Maybe make the eyes more green and less torqoise-y (dun know how to spell it XD) and make the earpink stand out a bit more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:29, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, I <3 this! You're really good with tabbies. Can you define the shading a tad? 13:01, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 18:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) ~ Redone
So...yeah... First tortie for PCA. Tell me how bad it looks, please. Side note: If y'all want me to smudge, then I can give it a shot. 02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes please smudge. 02:40, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not promising anything good. Also, I don't remember reading that smudging was mandatory... So yeah... Re-uploaded. Enjoy. 02:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, smudging has never been mandatory? It's always been the artist's choice, hasn't it? Anyways, it's grogeous! Better than Olivenose. *nods* Darken the shading a bit though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:08, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, shut up. Olivenose is sooo much better, and you know it. Also, if I darken the shading, the paws will become all gray. XD 03:12, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, I just came home,. and I forgot what I said on here, then I saw 'Paleclaw, Shut up.' And I was like O.O What did I do? o.o Anyways, no, Olivenose really isn't better and YOU know it. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:45, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Paleh and Cloudy, shush. BOTH of yours are stunning. We dun need contests. XD But hai. This is so good! I can't see the shading on the black, though. Darken that? 13:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Guise, you all are have stunning chararts, kay? Kay. Define the shading altogether a bit :3 16:33, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Erm... It's not all that great, and you know it. xD Re-uploaded. 00:43, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. I don't know what you're talking about, this is great! 01:05, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Meh. 01:14, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (K) ~ Redone
Woot! Gotta love those ginger-and-white cats! ;) Anyway, redone as a long-hair. OA was Spottedwing. Changes aren't showing yet. Comments? 03:05, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gotta love Scarlet's ginger and white cats. I can barely see the stripes on her right patch near her chest, darken those a tad. 13:12, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Their is some waste by the tail, get rid of that. Other than, looks great! 15:24, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define your light source. Her one leg is brighter than the other when the darker one is closer to your indicated light source. Beautiful! 00:50, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ya'll know where to find the changes. ;) 03:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (W) - Tweaked
Several times before, he has been mentioned with "the same dark tabby pelt as Brambleclaw and Tigerstar". So I re-did his stripes to make it look more like Brambleclaw and Tigerstar, made his scar a bit longer, tweaked the shading and underbelly. Comments? 13:12, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur where the white meets the brown. I love your tabbies. =) 15:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

You sure you're looking at the right one? Just want to make sure =) It's in the revision history, and thanks! 16:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

.....yes. I'm looking at the right one. I know your tabbies when I see them. >.> 00:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Love. Kay, I'll tweak it when I come back from school. 12:02, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Lo) - Redone
I made this in advance a while ago, way before I even reserved it. And I hope this still counts as the 15th, because there's some discussion that shouldn't be here. Original artist was Minnowclaw, and the highlights and shading were blotchy. Changes won't show. 17:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It still counts, so don't worry. I'll be archiving that discussion now, since it's pointless. (xD) Darken the shading on the white areas, please. 17:25, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white part of his tail bigger 17:26, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail a bit. I like this new Ravenpaw. 20:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a darker red. 22:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dumb changes. 23:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Otterheart (W)- For Approval
Taking a break from all the tabbies, tortoiseshells, etc. and just doing a solid cat. XD She needed to be long haired, and the shading was a bit blotchy. OA was Bramble I believe. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:02, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw. Hands down, you are amazing with chararts. Darken the earpink just a tad ;3 23:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Awwww, thanks Splashy! ^^; ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:58, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

W00t; I love solids. ;D Can you darken the shading a bit? I like dark shading. =) Great job! 00:55, September 20, 2011 (UTC)