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Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ Withdrawn


Me no like. ;-; (Did the image align? or did I misname? I can't tell)

Smooth out the shading on the back, define the hind leg shading, define the eye depth, and blur the earpink just a tad. Looks nice, other than that. 18:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. 18:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Don't know if changes are showing.

Blur/smudge the shading more, and smooth it out. It's looking a bit blotchy right now. 23:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have no idea why this didn't happen when I did Spiketail. Probably because I'm used to setting it to at least 20/25

Define the shading on the legs. Those eyes look sexy X3 09:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit? 12:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened shading and tried to define a bit but I don't know if I can see it. By the way, when you said define shading on legs, did you mean all? And thanks about the eyes, Foxy :P  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:38, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah define the shading on all four legs :p 13:39, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on all four legs. 02:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, but it sort of confuses me to define the shading and the light. I'm not sure if changes are showing but I wanted to get this done so I didn't get this declined for lack of work. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:18, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Defining the light and shading means that basically you need to erase either some shading or put some more shading in, and in this case, it appears you need to erase some shading. So define the light on the legs? :P 13:46, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded When I defined the light on the back two legs, it looked weird so I ended up vaguely getting the front right paw and not doing the back left paw. Then again, I'm not sure if the changes are showing, but I wanted to show that I'm still active (The three days felt longer...) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:20, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the depth on the main body 08:47, April 22, 2015 ( UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading. 20:17, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I apologize if changes aren't showing. I'm not feeling well at the moment /)_(\ I try to upload within the next two days because for some reason it feels like longer. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:41, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. There would also be some light there too, actually.

I'm honestly having a hard time seeing the shading. Maybe darken it quite a bit? Also, define the eye depth. 20:28, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the shading fine but I'll darken it. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:01, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I might have to redo this. I lost the file >_<. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:23, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Well for when you do, define the tail shading a lot, and define the light on all the legs, as well as defining the eye depth... 02:25, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can't define the tail shading anymore. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:03, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

The legs need shadow... 23:43, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

But I can see the shadow he/she put on, sorry I'm not in this group thing.

I'll add more shadow. Intell, sign with  ~ and they/them pronouns please. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:25, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:40, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Is there tail shading? If so, can you define it, please? I like those eyes :) 17:49, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, I saw above that you said you couldn't define it any more, but could you please try? I seriously can't see it, like, at all. Maybe it's just my screen. Sorry if I'm being a pain and feel free to disregard me 17:54, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

It's all right, Ice. You're not being a pain. I've tried to add more shading or at least darken the tail shading but it would look uneven ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:03, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Should I add a fluffy tail? Since it was in his cites. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:38, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Only use the same blank the kit was. And I'm really sorry but I cannot see any leg shading at all. I can see pelt shading a little bit but I can't see anything else. Add darker shadow everywhere else. 03:48, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I decided I would just basically darken the shading everywhere or else it would look off. To me, at least. I can't darken the shading any more because I don't want it to be black, and I have trouble with using black for shading. I attempted to define tail shading a bit toot. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:05, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

You need to add shading to the legs. 21:33, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Don't be mean to him/her! Intellectualbaddie666 (talk)

They aren't being mean. They're just reminding me of what I can do to improve this image. I'm struggling a bit to add shading so I have to be a bit more careful. I keep having to add more, then lighten it, then define it again, then lighten it. I'll attempt but I am getting close to withdrawal. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:41, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added as much shading as I could to the legs (especially the front), and as of now, I cannot darken or add any more shading. I can completely shade out the back right paw, though, but that may be it. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 23:14, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Here is a suggestion for the shading: darkening it doesn't always work. Adding light to the legs and tail will help a lot in this case. Erase some on the shading where the light is hitting then blur it a bit. 03:21, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 12:03, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing becuase 1. It's been nearly a month, 2. I give up, basically, 3. Rogue is too hard for me. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 12:05, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. 12:17, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded shading grey cats without texture is actually painful 16:31, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't the eyes be large like the kit? 18:27, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Right, I forgot about that. I'll change them in the next upload. 18:30, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur le shading mur? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:09, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading a smidge? 14:59, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Instead of darkening it, I would say make another layer of shading to add depth to it. Right now it looks rather flat, however if you make another layer with less shading than this (more around the innermost area of the shading like where the tail and haunches meet) that should do it. 21:10 Mon May 11

Actually, I'm gonna have to withdraw, sorry. Shading grey cats that don't have texture is an absolute pain, and I'm sick of this image already. 18:56, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Approval
Yay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? R a v e n s t e p⋆ 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Better? 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we wait before this is settled? 免得我们还要重做 02:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

No- there's no need, considering it wouldn't be done for a long time.

As far as I'm concerned, the chest is smudged with a hard-edged brush 08:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 01:31, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

he needs texture, and on top of that texture theres dull highlights, and it was all smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 04:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

The chest too, it still looks over-blurred 08:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using the smudge tool in GIMP? I know you said you used GIMP. Use the smudge tool on the white chest. The earpink looks a lot better! Maybe lighten it a bit more? 13:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Oh my, the texture didn't fail… Im insanely proud of this  00:42, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink a bit, and make it less neon-y? 00:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's not neon at all. It blends well perfectly with the fur. 01:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make it more pink than purple please. That's pretty much what Storm was asking, simplified. Just make it a lighter pink on the spectrum. Very nice^^ 13:51, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  17:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I just looked at the apprentice, and I think the patch on his chest is a tiiiiny bit smaller Correct me if I am wrong It could just be my screen though 07:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

But that is the apprentice, which is a smaller blank. 13:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the chest white is fine, so im not changing it yet  19:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's supposed to be small, so please shrink it. While the apprentice blanks are smaller, the patch of white you have on here is much too big.

Re~Upped Ok  22:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I actually saved the image and zoomed it in to see details, and I think I can see a black outline around the white chest and the bottom whisker. There's also a black hard-eged splotch on his back. I like him! Just try to see what I was talking about (might be just my screen) and blur the hind paws shading slightly^^ good job 14:13, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

That's actually normal "waste", per se. Define the light on the front paw closest? 18:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

How is it "waste"? It's on the pelt. 00:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, were you talking about on the warrior or apprentice image, Silver? 00:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I was talking about this warrior image. It could  be just my screen though 00:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Uh yeah... Here world  02:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's a lil bit of waste on the top of the nose; also, make the earpink more triangular. 15:35, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I like this. :)  01:16, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's still a somewhat outline around the white, is it just the shading? But the shading really shouldn't just go around the shape >.> 13:49, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Closest to le lineart or towards his body over there? ===>  14:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Idk, just around the white chest 11:43, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 00:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is still quite neon, and its quite small as well. Maybe expand the earpink back out a ways, and dull down the neon-ness. Make it more dull gray-ish pink, but still have a bit of brightness. 20:27, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Sunstream Strongly Dislikes Earpink. 00:36, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Shrink down the white dash on her chest please. And I'll promote you to an apprentice, since you seem to know what you are doing. 11:38, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Yay thank you! :)  13:40, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:42, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  Oh wow your sig Bramble and Burnt's are like...Identical in colors. 02:02, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

lol, sorry, The base is looking dark greenish brown, any chance you could make it blacker? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 02:05, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think it looks perfectly black 02:26, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

that neck shading needs major lightening or something, and the white patch would be included in that shading. 21:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  01:37, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named Slightfoot.warrior.png. The wiki is case sensitive 07:50, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

Eee it wont let me rename it. :T  22:42, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

No, but I can rename it. =P

Blur the shading on the back foot behind the body and the neck and the face. Looking good ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  15:27, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck area. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:08, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I hope it shows  01:16, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Curlfeather (W) - For Approval
Yippie! My first PCA charart! If i shoud make her shorthaired, let me know! 15:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Remove some of the shadow from her hind leg where it curls when she sits, as well as the knob of shadow at the back of her tail; it should be a straight shadow line. Also mind blurring the shadow a bit more? And define the light on the front and hind paw closest to us. 15:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading to the head as well. 16:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch and add a bit more light to the foreleg closest to us. If you want, there's a shading tutorial here 18:11, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more… triangular? And blur it more It might be just me, it looks a little too neon-y 22:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, sorry i haven't had a chance to reupload it yet, i'll do it first thing tomorrow. 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The light could be defined on all the legs tbh 05:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  14:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, use a hard edged blur tool at the rate of 100 14:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reupped- Yay! 14:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)'''

The shading seems to be... disconnected on the back, and it should be connected, so add some shading there. I hope that wasn't too confusing. Also, can you define the light on the legs? 15:13, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped I didn't change the light on the legs because that is how it looked on the shading placement. 15:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking all up his back and in other places too. Define the earpink as well. Sorry if I'm commenting too much. I really like this! 17:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more, please? It's difficult to see. 17:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back. If you're gonna add shading to the back and chest fur and tail, add some to the legs please. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 18:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped- Just re-did all of the shading. @Icebreeze, Don't worry, you can comment all you want :)  19:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, because now the shading is looking... green? I suggest that you shade in black and lower the opacity (you don't have to though) but at least make the shading less greenish. Blur the shading as well. I'm sorry I'm commenting again, you're probably getting really annoyed 20:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped Ugh it isint showing up… You are not annoying me don't worry   22:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lolp at first I thought her name was "Cerealfeather" for some reason :P I see that you're having some problems with the shading, maybe try to make the shading itself smoother, then blue it, if that makes any sense 09:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in and I see some waste around the image. Please remove it. User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:02, April, 20, 2015

Blur and maybe dull the shading a bit more. Also, there's a speck of waste at the very top of the image over the tail 18:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also there's still some shading on her hind leg where it curls when she sits that isn't connected to anything, so if you could get rid of that...? 22:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and then blur the shading more on them 07:52, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, will post soon... 15:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  18:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still need to get rid of the random shadow. It's like right by her underbelly, where the hind leg curls into it towards the knee (?) 18:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I've promoted you to an apprentice, and changed the file name. Caps are very important for these filenames- it should be File:Curlfeather.warrior.png.

Did you set your shading layer to multiply? It might help the shadows look a little more tinted to the base color and natural. If you just shade with black and lower the opacity, it might throw the color off a tad. It's just a suggestion, you don't have to go with it if you don't want 18:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the texture flower with the fur more? Can you lighten the shading? (If Ivy said this, Im sorry I couldn't understand what you said.. sorry  lel 19:42, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  01:41, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it still looks really hard edged 14:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  23:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 14:11, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and lighten the earpink? I can't really see it. 00:53, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped Sorry i did it but forgot to reupload. 00:00, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading and why is there a black spot on his muzzle? 10:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the black spot is shading, and if so, I don't think it should be there. 19:51, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

The color is leaking on ===> this ear, meaning its not all the way to the lineart. 20:25, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

My eyes see no black spot... 00:03, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped I also don't  00:25, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

I don't either. But there is a speck of brightness or something on too of the earpinks shadow...

Could you blur the shading on the neck, the base of the tail, and the front legs just a tiiiny bit, please? 20:05, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

I spy a dark spot on the muzzle. Just below the nose. Unless that was intentional. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:26, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see a dark spot... 02:27, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

There is a dark shaded spot on the muzzle that should not be there since it doesn't go with this lightsource. It's to the left of the whiskers, right below the nose. 09:17, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in to the image, and saw no black spot. 13:37, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty sure they're talking about the patch of shading shown circled in red.

You're all talking about the spot on the muzzle right? If so, that does need to be removed as the light would be coming from that side. Also, define the earpink and perhaps lighten up the shading a few ticks? 06:28, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

I would make the stripes look more life-like and slim. Flame star22  18:58, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

There aren't any stripes- that's texture.

ReUpped Is this what you ment? 22:49, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more 15:58, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink. it looks gray. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:48, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

ReUpped  15:28, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur shading a lot more on the neck and flank 20:09, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
What a traitor. 21:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I never read MV yet, so I can't agree with you xD Define the light on his tail-tip? 01:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the shading on the legs and define the ear pink just a little. Yes, Appledusk is a big mouse-brain and I was like too bad when he died 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 12:21, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There should be light on his chest, and I think the shading could be defined and blurred/smudged more. 17:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 18:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking on his tail-tip? 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly I didn't read MV yet but when I saw he was killed my Mapleshade I went like "Beautiful job girl" blur the shading below the chin and the shading is leaking on the shoulder 15:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The shading was leaking in several other spots, too. 20:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I really hate this and I want to do something else, so I'm withdrawing. 23:39, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Even though im not officially in the PCA, can i take over? 23:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

You don't need to ask just reserve it

-ReUpped Ok, my turn. 03:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading way more and change the heading please 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his pelt color. 18:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, please. 23:29, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

here is the base colour for the warrior image. 04:27, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thanks for the colour, Stealthfire :)  01:34, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more until it blends perfectly with the pelt 01:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thankfully i was still online  01:48, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to blur the shading way more than that. Try to use a hard-edged blur tool with the rate of 100 (if you're using GIMP) and blur the edges only. 14:19, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink and define it on the other ear 19:27, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks cut off at the edges (by that I mean there's space between the shading and lineart). Fix that, please. Also, blur the shading a lot more. 21:36 Fri Apr 24

-ReUpped I tried texture too  15:01, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You'll need to remove the texture, sorry. His warrior image doesn't have it, and you need to match that.

Expand the ear-pink in --> this ear and blur/smooth the shading inside the ear 17:40, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Both of the earpinks need to be expanded. The earpink on this blank usually is literally the whole ear. And the shading is leaking a lot around his pelt. 00:52, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't need to be in the whole ear- that's just a preference that many of us do.

-ReUpped  23:49, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is still leaking in quite a few places 00:57, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, please try to be more specific when you're commenting. I'd say the shading on the part where the stomach meets the leg, and the neck are leaking away from the liner art. 02:53, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's also leaking on the stomach on <-- side of the tail-tip. 19:56, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped  23:55, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Its still leaking a liiittle bit on the shoulder by the underbelly and under the chin 00:04, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading A LOT more on the neck and face area? (Im not trying to sound rude :3 ) ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Not on the face please. Only on the neck. 02:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

You need alot more shading on the neck and face area, as Brambleshade said. And, is the black by the ear 'supposed' to be there? Flame star22  19:00, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

The facial shading is fine, tbh. I'm sure the black on the earpink is just shading. Anyway, this image is looking good, but could you blur the shading on ---> leg? 17:42, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped  22:46, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading.

Shading is still leaking under the chin 21:34, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the tail-tip shading, please. 23:43, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Yawn  18:39, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is still leaking under the chin by the back not literally under the chin. 20:16, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define/add shading on the head? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:36, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Star) - CBA
02:28, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on ==> that leg 10:04, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:12, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shape of the shading 08:14, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:35, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the near front paw a little? 19:54, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the main flank shadow a little bit? 02:30, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:14, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading just a little, particularly on the main body. 09:12, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:10, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and darken the shading on ==> that leg 05:02, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:19, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. Some parts tell me its coming from ==> there and the rest tells me otherwise 07:51, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:07, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail-tip 20:17, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload 21:42, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 10:40, May 12, 2015 (UTC)


 * I think it's fine 16:06, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with that, and I'm going to CBA this. Scarlet's shading has always been like this, and that's what makes her images so unique.

Fernsong (A) ~ For Approval
Took the colors from the file. Gonna redo that tail shading, though, when I'm less tired. Probably. 21:32, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the facial shading 06:13, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. I can't see it that much. He looks gorgeous, Shinx! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 16:24, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

reups 22:18, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the upper body. 17:16, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

...do you mean his back or his chest area? Chest/neck area, right? 21:51, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think they mean in between the leg and the belly area, because it looks kind of sharp there. 21:52, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink in ===> that ear. It looks like the pelt is inside that ear and I can't hardly see any pink. 14:12, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the other ear too (so basically define the earpink in both ears :P). I can't see any pink in either ear. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:40, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

reups 20:19, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading please? Its kinda hard to see. Also, this is a beautiful image; I absoluetly love the colors. :) 21:13 Mon May 11

reeeups 16:11, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Lizardtail (W) ~ For Approval
For the love of Castiel, its so hard to copy off your own work -.-. Not to mention I dont have the apprentice's file anymore, but its my same style of texture I always do. I just dont think the colors are right...I dunno. Comment away~ 23:10, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs and the back ear. Also, I can't see the ear pink (it really blends in with the pelt and I only see a tiny line near the middle of the each), so can you possibly define that just a bit?

Gah, I love that texture. I think you should blur the shading on the neck a teeny more, and define the light on the hind leg. Good job Frosty :) 00:53, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! =) 04:46, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Position the earpink more in the middle of the ear, and maybe make it less gray? Also blur it a bit more 17:20, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

The positioning of it is fine. Jayie does it the same way. And it is pink, and many images have been approved with that color. I will wait for a second opinion on smudging it though. Just this once. 17:48, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smudging it wouldn't hurt- it seems a bit too uniform right now as it is

Define the light on the front paw farthest from us 20:18, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

I'll reupload(this and tweaks) on Monday. Sorry I've been sick since Tuesday. 00:17, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:42, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Alderpaw (K) ~ For Approval
I tried to match the apprentice, but I don't think I was particularly successful 20:41, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink? He looks adorable! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:13, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! Hopefully you can see the earpink better now. I hate earpink. 22:54, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source 08:20, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 20:44, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 00:50, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe define the front legs shading. 11:16, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 20:27, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see your light source 10:19, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Uh I can see it just fine 13:22, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Light source is fine, could you define the light on the legs just a touch more and define the ear-pink just a bit more? He's cute! 02:09, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt Q.) - CBA
My Bluey! I used the exact same shading I used on her normal queen, so I'd rather not touch that. 20:43, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

What works on one image won't necessarily work on another. Blur the shading and lighten it a bit. Also, why does she get these alts? I'm confused.

Reuploaded. Look here for the discussion.  22:10, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink goes way too far down on the head. Maybe push it back up a bit? 22:16, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Why do ANY cats get alts? It makes absoloutely no sense.. Just use the regular charart. I'm thinking Alts are just ways to do more chararts. Flame star22  22:18, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Alts are a way to show mistakes within the series. They're a legitimate thing that we've been doing for years here- we're not just going to stop and drop the concept.

Reuploaded. 22:24, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Just thought it was odd, and thank you for clearing that up for me. Flame star22  22:26, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face please. 00:20, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:28, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

i stil dont see why she should get this? we dont know what stage at life shes shown at on the cover? 09:10, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's because that pic showed up in every chapter for Bluestar's prophecy. Also, I think we agreed that we would give the art to the ranks that were mentioned. 09:15, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

that doesnt matter honestly? it also appeared when she was a kit, and she's obviously not a kit then. I'm pretty sure this is assuming. 19:21, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Friendly reminder that the pictures inside the book are grayscale, so we cannot assume she was blue there. If it's for the cover, it wouldn't be a kit, it would be her current rank as of the cover- which we don't know. And I thought this was for The Ultimate Guide and Cats of the Clans, not Bluestar's Prophecy. =/ Using that chapter picture is totally an excuse for more art and you're picking at everything to get more images. We don't use chapter pictures since we can't tell who is who.

Then does this mean she literally shouldn't get any alts? 21:47, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

I was talking about the chapter header image- not any context within the book, like someone calling her silver, gray, ect. Using the chapter picture alone is not a legitimate reason to make an image. Her other alts are still valid in every way, shape, and form.

Okay. Firstly, could we please not accuse people of wanting more art to do? Not everyone is terribly obsessed in doing art and desperate for more .-. I added the characters to the list because the discussion was over, archived and nobody objected against the proposal. Secondly, if this alt doesn't warrant, basically all her "blue alts" need to get taken down because we have no idea what rank she is in. 07:52, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

I'll say that because that's what it looks like. I've been here far longer than any active member, save for Scarlet and David, and we've had this happen in the past. You think I can't tell when someone wants art or not? What book is this alt for? The discussion was more about The Ultimate Guide and Cats of the Clans, from what I gathered, not Bluestar's Prophecy. The chapter art is not counted as a legitimate image because it is in grayscale and there is no color. If the alt is from TUG and CotC, then yes, it's warranted. But Fox just said above that it's for the chapter art for BP- which that is not a legitimate one. I see nothing in that discussion about the chapter pictures. If that's what this alt is for, then it is invalid. If the art is for her blue appearance, then that's another story entirely and the image is warranted. I was under the impression that from the discussion, that's what this alt was for- nothing more, nothing less. Should that be the case, I think all ranks would be appropriate, as she is mentioned as pretty much every rank within TUG and CotC.

And thank you for that- This is declined. 08:05, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

If someone can actually clear it up as to which book this is for, then I'm all for changing the heading, Burnt. I honestly don't know which one it's for. The discussion said one thing, and Fox appears to have said another. Once that's cleared up, I say go ahead and change the heading back to "For Approval".

I never said the CHAPTER pics were the only reason for it????????? O.O 08:14, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

"I think it's because that pic showed up in every chapter for Bluestar's prophecy. "

That's what that looks like to me. Now, since I've just checked The Ultimate Guide, Bluestar is mentioned as a kit, apprentice, warrior, queen, deputy, and leader in that section for her. She is also mentioned to be in StarClan. If you want to go with that instead of some chapter pictures (which I think they're actually gray or something along those lines... pretty sure the picture is on the Warriors website somewhere....), then we can go ahead and change this back.

Okay, I am sorry if I sounded that way. My wording = no. But honestly I never intended to say it was the ONLY reason... Let's honestly not turn this into a fight 08:23, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, I think we can change this back.

Define the light on the face 04:56, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also removed the torn ear because I remembered the image this was based on didn't have one. 12:42, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Ear pink on the eyebrow whiskers and blur the shading more. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 00:08, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure what you meant about the earpink. Care to explain? 20:47, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think Bramble means to move the earpink farther up because it looks like its still too far down on her head. 23:36, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:03, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the flank/belly. 20:19, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:52, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Curlfeather (K) ~ For Approval
My first character art, I'm so nervous even though there's nothing to be nevervous about! I might redo the brindling on the face (or whatever you'd call that) I'm not sure if I like it. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

You must reserve this on the main page of PCA. I'll do it for you this time. Define the shading on the legs and the tail, this looks good. 00:16, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

My apologies, thank you for letting me know and adding me to the list. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

This should be 'For Evaluation' since you're new. You're not on the project member list, only the table. Are you sure you asked to join beforehand? If not, then you're not allowed to make charart. (I did look first) 02:30, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Anyone can make images, regardless of project membership. That is not required. If they're on the table, then they can make whatever their heart wants, regardless of whether or not they're in the project "member list". As long as it's reserved on the table, then they're fine. .-.

Define the shading overall, not just on the legs and tail. Amazing job for your first that texture is much better than my first attempt. 12:32, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

If I'm correct, the rules say you don't have to be a part of the project to submit art like Snow said. I just put in a request to join regardless, so no worries! P.S. I'll fix and reup it once I'm on my main computer. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Please darken the shading. And sorry about that earlier 21:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on her head just a bit? It might just be my monitor... Looks good! 23:37, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Try to mach File:Curlfeather.warrior.png. I can ask Darkfire to send you the xcf. if you want. 00:49, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

I did use it as a reference, but I'll try and edit it so it looks closer to it. I use SAI for my drawings, so the GIMP file wouldn't really work. 01:11, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:21, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw 08:00, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, I love this shading. Could you define the shading on ---> leg? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 08:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:50, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Soften and expand the shading on the legs 04:49, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading 14:51, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Also add some shading on the bottom back <==== this side of her tail 20:19, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:41, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading where the back paw meets the body ( on >>> this side of the image in the corner) and define it there, seen as with your light source, there should be a shdow there (not much, but a shadow nontheless). Also, blur the shading at the base of the tail. I love this image. :) 21:16 Mon May 11

Sandstorm (Alt. W 3) - For Approval
Eh, I may redo some of the stripes >.< but here she is! 22:10, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

The title should say 'For Approval'. But omg how did you do this its amazing hhhh Define the shading on the tail and all four paws 22:17, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

I know >.< my computer must not have saved the title last time. Much patience and a lot of tweaking haha 23:02, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

reupped  23:09, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and define the light on the tailtip a bit more. Gorgous, dear! 23:10, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Thank you!^.^ 23:18, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smothen and define the shading on the legs. My god. Teach my your tricks. ;o; ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 08:32, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

reupped I changed the tint on the shading slightly to hopefully make it a little easier to see ^.^' 13:04, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail 23:32, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

reupped 02:12, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

OMG it's so so so so so pretty!!! How did you do this! You should maybe smooth out the tail shading  I know how annoying this blank is  and more eye depth :) 08:01, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'm impressed O_o Define the earpink a tiny bit? 10:32, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

reupped ^.^ Thanks! That tail shading is such a pain to smooth out  12:49, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on our left ear? This is gorgeous. 15:30, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

reupped 16:51, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 12:53, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

reupped 20:51, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

comments? 01:15, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Place some shading on the ear closest to us. 10:19, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

reupped 11:45, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Puddlekit (K) - CBA
I didn't see any rule that said I couldn't reclaim this right away. I redid him to be brown with white splotches, and I'm insanely happy with this new design. I based him off a snowshoe cat with a mostly brown pelt and white splotches. The splotches are mostly on his back, but you can see some on his hip, and his front legs. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 09:00, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

He looks a bit tortoieshell. Maybe define shading on the ears? User: Dewdrops56/ talk 13:07, May, 6, 2015

Lower the amount of black in his pelt a lot, he looks tortie. 13:14, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

He is supposed to have black on his pelt, I believe. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 19:01, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Both the revamped and old allegiences Kate published as well as the wiki listed him as "A brown tom with white splotches." I can find no mention of black on his pelt anywhere. Plus, I know Warriors doesn't go for realism, but male cats cannot be torties unless of a genetic defect, so it makes more sense for him to be just brown and white anyway. I don't mean at all to come off as harsh, so aplogies if I did. 19:14, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the black your thinking of is shading. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 19:36, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

It's not black, it's a very dark brown. As stated, I based his pattern off that of a snowshoe cat, which has this mix of brown, white, and darker browns. But I'll lighten it a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:42, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

The brown looks fine 23:32, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

I've seen the picture that Jayie used for this- it does indeed have different shades of brown and white. There's no black whatsoever on that image she showed me. The colors are fine, as a snowshoe is a very real and legitimate style.

Alright, sorry, it just looked black on my monitor. Could you still lighten it up just a touch, I think it just looks a little too dark. 13:45, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Waste on le head. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 00:06, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tweaked the ear, chest, and face shading. I will lighten the fur a smidge (only a smidge) and get rid of the waste in the morning. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:14, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 12:52, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened fur slightly and defined ear pink. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:08, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Fur color is perfect now, thank you! 14:39, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? This'll be one amazing apprentice image once he becomes Puddlepaw again.

Rippletail (K) ~ For Approval
I dont know if I named this file correctly.... These blanks are so tiny But the shading looks like crap. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?!

Define the shading on the face and around the front legs. 21:37, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading as well 22:59, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source 23:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Nope, it wasn't named right, so I'll go ahead and fix that for you. ^.^

Define the light on the tail 14:53, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-up woot woot ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw 20:52, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blue the shading 09:40, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

You mean blur, right? Also, maybe lighten it a few ticks? 22:25, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

If I lighten it, its gonna look like there isn't any shading. So Im .. not going to do that :/ ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:04, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, all you need to do it lighten it jussst a tiny bit, by 2 or 3 pixels on the opacity bar and you should be okay. Also, blur the shading on the head. 21:19 Mon May 11

Cloverfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
I literally didn't try. 01:38, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck 04:47, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Her back paw looks white. Maybe darken it please? User: Dewdrops56/ talk 13:37, May, 7, 2015

Define the shading on the face and legs, also maybe add some lighting to it? (It's more of a style choice.) 13:41, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Her back paw doesn't look white. It's just because there's no shadow where you're looking. I think it looks fine. Maybe blur the shading on the tail 14:54, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 22:45, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading 12:51, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt D) ~ For Approval
A blue cat. I had to have her. 15:28, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the torn ear, as image this is based off of didn't have it. Also, define and add a bit of depth to the shading. Looking good. 20:28, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs. all of them '3'  So beautiful!! ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:51, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups merci xx 21:48, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a smidge. Looks good! 22:56, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 18:11, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a teen, or lighten it :) btw Sorrel, my friend has been talking about "Dauntless" and "Blue glasses" and stuff, I think it's about The Faults in Our Stars or smth, (I somehow found it first from your profile and then she mentioned it) and I think you should meet her XP 15:17, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

"Dauntless" is a group from Divergent, not something from The Fault in Our Stars. Anywaaaaays, define the shading on the back foot (the one we can barely see).

Reups I slung a hint of highlights on it, and did the shading issues; also, it a reference to Divergent. As for the blue, it's just a colour I'm incredibly fond of - but I do adore TFiOS ;). 00:43, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

I just realized it a fe days ago - I only watched the divergent movie without subtitles and I suck at listening. Oops about that! Define light on the Fron leg closest to us? 11:37, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

I see it just fine. 14:13, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Ferntail (W) ~ CBA
15:44, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and lighten up the shading on the body. 15:52, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

This looks amazing! *-* Define the light on the ear farthest from us 15:55, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Thank You :3 17:04, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blue the shading on the ear farthest from us. And can you make the blue stand out more? Its looking.. really white. Gorgeous! ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:52, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

You mean BLUR the shading, right? 06:10, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Eh,im a bit confused now XD What do you mean by looking white? 07:43, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think she means the eye. This is beautiful!!! 14:44, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks ^^  16:21, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 19:18, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, honestly, no. I think this is beautiful as it is and needs no extra work. Beautiful artwork, Sziri. :) 2:19 Wed May 13

CBA? 02:25, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Slatekit (K) ~ For Approval
The first time I tried texture ^^ Is it okay? If it makes the picture look worse, tell me if I should remove it 08:26, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

I like that texture :) define the light on the legs 09:18, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks ^^ 11:36, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, legs and the back foot. Blur the shading on the neck. 12:29, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Twice, the first time I had the texture layer hidden on accident when I saved it as a .png 22:23, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 08:16, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Perchwing (W) ~ For Approval
Perchy my lady❤ I wish she becomes a queen so I can do her beautiful eyes 14:40, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadow on the back legs? And add a bit of shadow in between her belly. Looks wonderful Silver ^^ 14:45, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups you know what, the thing you think that's part of the gray, it's the lumpy shading lmao 14:48, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Her patches need to be smudged much, much more, to match the apprentice. 15:39, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I think they matched but oh well whatever you say 15:46, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body 08:42, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I tinted the shading a tad since people have been having a huge pain with the shading :P It's not how we normally do shading on warrior blanks, and she's gray, so why not 11:44, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) ~ For Approval
what kind of name is sneezecloud <span style="">15:07 Sat May 9

A cloud that sneezes. At least not something like Sneezeberry or smth :P Define the light on the legs further from us. I like him! :DDD 15:13, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body 01:52, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't understand why I need to define light on legs that would be in shadow in this pose...? I'll get to the body shading thing right away, though. <span style="">06:42 Sun May 10

Maybe define the earpink? I can barely see it. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:08, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

There would be a tiny bit of light on his back paw by his toes in this light source 14:55, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading needs defined overall. 15:22, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Fox already said that, Ravenpelt. Please be careful not to comment what's already been said. 15:43, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I changed what I said. I was abit of a zombie this morning, probably shouldn't be on here when I'm that tired. 16:13, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't need to change the source, it's fine. people have been using it for longer than a lot of people have been here. >.> 05:54, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Redstar (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
Did anyone miss our great leader? 01:51, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Our great leader has a cloud looking blob near his ear aka waste 01:56, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you for that ( 01:59, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. The shading looks kinda funky on the chest, but I think that's just me. 15:24, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the earpink just fine. Maybe reduce the tuft-age though 15:44, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Didn't get what you meant but I blurred the shading a bit 04:32, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

I meant get rid of some of the fur in his ear. He's short furred so he wouldn't have that much tuft age in his ear 13:31, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please clarify that? I don't get what you mean by the tuft. 13:57, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

tuft noun 1. a bunch or collection of something, typically threads, grass, or hair, held or growing together at the base.

The tuft in his ear. Shouldn't be that big, because he's short-furred. 14:22, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Dude there isn't any tuff what are you talking about 00:41, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ive made StarClanners with the same "tuft" you are talking about, and no ones had a problem with it. Unless you can explain, Ive gotta disagree with you for this time. 01:51, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Owlnose (Ki) ~ For Approval
This took ages. <span style="">19:19 Sun May 10

Like can you make that even cuter? >.> Smooth out the right leg shading? 00:59, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Our right or his right? <span style="">1:56 Mon May 11

Our right, his left^^ 12:47, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a few ticks, just enough to see the stripes through it 15:46, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:23 Mon May 11

Birch (Ro) ~ For Approval
ah yes only i can ever 100% match my patterns correctly 22:26, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Nice, please unsmudge the stripes in the middle of his side? Like you can see two lines there. If you get what I mean... If not I can circle them 07:24, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

the stripes on his kit were smudged similarly so i'll let this slide o3o 09:56, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

These two lines only I meant. =) 10:13, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

can you shade the nose or something? it looks odd being so bright with the shading as it is. 19:43, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Seedpelt (W) ~ For Approval
I copy pasted the deputy into new lineart, with the tail being the obvious exception 19:35, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

oohh very purtty, Skt! Define the shading on the chest/under the chin just a touch more and define the light on the tail 02:06, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Apprentice) ~For Evaluation
Tell me if it needs the nick!

There's waste by the head area. It needs the nick, since it's the alt image, and it has the nick anyway. Also, you need silver on the tail-tip and muzzle, as it has to match the other images. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  22:36, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reups!: Better?

If this is the one for TUG then it shouldn't have the nick, as she's shown without it...