Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Folder for images that had been up for approval before the beginning of Tweak Week.

Start of Tweak Week
Everyone, please remember to view the guidelines before posting on this page, so you know what you're doing. Make sure to put in as much effort as possible to follow all the guidelines so this can run as smoothly as possible. I will be away until Saturday at a camp, and on my return I will expect there to have been no major arguments or fights. You all are members of this Project; act professionally and maturely. If you have any questions, please address them to any of the Project leads after checking the guidelines to make sure they are not already answered there. Leads, should any problems arise, deal with the situation efficiently and calmly and resolve the problem as swiftly as you can. Use some independent intelligence, as I won’t be here to deal with the situation until I return. I know I can count on you. Good luck everyone, and have fun. :) This can be archived later. Bram ble 04:43, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Question
For the new chararts, do we upload them on the current images? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 04:57, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Question is answered in the guidelines, right at the top. Did you not read them? --Bram ble 05:08, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I only skimmed, so I must have missed it. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 05:09, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, after tweak week is over, all our chararts that were here before will be returned to the page right? Sorry, I've never been through a tweak week before :) Night  Fall 06:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, they'll be put back. Lots of us haven't been through Tweak Week before; I barely missed it. Last time TW was delayed until all of the images on the page were approved, so this one is very different. Plus, it's three weeks longer. :P I sincerely doubt I needed to say all that to answer your question, but oh well. :D  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 23:35, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, it's fine :) Thanks! Night  Fall 03:06, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

No problem. :) Can you clear up the approving process for me with tweaked images? I know that we put "improvement completed" and that we put it in a new archive, but I'm not sure whether we wait 24 hours with no comments or if we just go ahead and add it when we think it's ready without waiting for any possible last minute comments there would be in a 24 hours.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 03:18, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

To be perfectly honest, I have no idea either :P Night  Fall 03:38, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

The last Tweak Week, I don't remember whether they waited 24 hours, but you can check the archives. 雨晶須 五六七 13:31, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

They used cba last time. But I've reread the guidelines, and I think I've figured it out. Since the guidelines say "the 24 hours will not be used," we archive them when we think they're ready. But it said after that that the images have already been approved so they don't need to be approved again, but for images that have been redone rather than just edited, should we wait 24 hours?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 13:51, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Im an apprentice but i think i can answer that question (i really wish i was a warrior, But dont all apprentices) i think that even though its being redone it was still a older image and just being re done because lets just say the person doing a cat had to completly re do it cause there was no way it could be edited without completly wrecking the charart so they had to re do it. But its still an older image so i think no. But im just an apprentice so you dont have to listen to this. So the leader deputy will decide if its ok or not  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 13:56, July 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * Okay, in Bramble's absence I will do my best to clear things up =) The images that were up for approval will be returned to this page once TW is over and life will resume as usual reverting back to the usual rules. For the purpose of TW the senior warriors have the power to 'approve' or rather verify the image once it is at the high standards we have come to expect and once the necessary changes have been made. I believe the same goes for a redone image (though without double checking the guidelines I cannot be sure whether anything different is stated there; I'm trusting that it isn't hence the question) though in this case I think it would be wise to use the sense that is assumed with senior warrior-ship XD Perhaps give time to make sure there are no other issues (ie. wait a whie after the last upload before approving) but no 24 hour 'call' should be used as far as I am aware . -- Sandy star 17:50, July 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * I stand corrected after checking the guidelines:
 * These sections should go through the full 24 hours before approval, but will still be archived in respective Tweak Week archives.
 * That should solve that. -- Sandy star 17:54, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

That clears everything up really well. Thanks, Sandy.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 00:29, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, I'm confused... earlier in the guidelines it says: "The 24 hours will not be used. The image has already been approved; it does not need to be again. The senior team has the authority to archive images with the finishing sentence of “Improvement completed.” " This seems to contradict the other part that Sandy mentioned. So which one is it meant to be? o.O insane  brick'd 20:44, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

24 hours will not be used for tweaked images but will for redone ones... which makes me think I made a mistake in approving Goldenflower without a 24 hour call... oops. -- Sandy star 20:48, July 9, 2010 (UTC) Never mind, I didn't. But that is how it works as I understand it. -- Sandy star 20:49, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) Redone
Alright, she needed to have the shading and highlights style fixed. I tried to do this without completely redoing the image, but I couldn't :/ So, I changed the shading and highlights style, and I made the ear pink the color of her kit image; as it was very purple before. Okay, how does she look? Night Fall 06:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading on the back of her neck/behind her ear. Dark hallows 06:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added shading behind ear Night  Fall 06:47, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the head ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Added head shading Night  Fall 18:45, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit more--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:40, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink; and I tried to smooth out the shading which, in my opinion, looked a little bumpy Night  Fall 03:40, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I hate to be picky, but the shading still looks a little bumpy to me. Is there any chance of blending it some more? -- Sandy star 18:34, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I redid her, is this any better? Night Fall 20:02, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

She's really gray now. Lighten her some. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  20:11, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? Night Fall 20:29, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is picky, but as you have redone her completely, not unreasonable: make the ear pink slightly smaller and more triangular. Then she's good to go. -- Sandy star 20:51, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? Night Fall 21:23, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. As a redone image, CBA? -- Sandy star 21:28, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Bluestar (W)
So, I re-did the image, and I am sorry, but I do not know who made the image before. I wasn't sure if I should add the scar, so please tell me if I should. εСћб ђэάѓτ  11:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

i think should not cause was it seen on her leader or older warrior image? otherwise this is really good apart from the shading under the neck that i think is supposed to be there but i dont know  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 12:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading, ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I darkened the shading and blurred the highlights. εСћб ђэάѓτ  16:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but perhaps make the ear pink a bit bigger? insane brick'd 16:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto insane. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made ear pink bigger. How's it now? εСћб ђэάѓτ  17:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading needs serious blurring. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   18:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Is it okay? εСћб ђэάѓτ  18:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. The blue is a little dark--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit, she looks very dark compared to her other images Night  Fall 18:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

She's supposed to have a silver tinged muzzle and tail tip.XxdovesongXX 07:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

She only had the silver muzzle and tipped tail because she was getting old. I don't think it's needed on her warrior image, because she is still young--  Night s h i n e    ~  07:21, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made her lighter. εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading the back leg. ♥Ice shine★  15:59, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It could still be lightened more. I think the colour should be similar to her kit and apprentice images--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:30, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit too bright, try desaturating it some Night  Fall 17:10, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad, and make the muzzle silver. Dawny  19:40, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add the silver tipped tail? Mõŏń    ۞   03:59, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was after she got old Night  Fall 06:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

blur haunch shading. ♥Ice shine★  14:52, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink just doesn't seem right for this colour pelt. Perhaps take it from another blue-ish cat with a more natural colour. Maybe Mistystar? -- Sandy star 19:56, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I changed the earpink to look more like Mistystar's, I blurred as much as I could, and I desaturated it. I didn't add the silver tipped muzzle and tail because that was when she got older. εСћб ђэάѓτ  12:32, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

She's should be more of a gray color. Darkhallows... Mew? 18:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (W)
Okay, so I got rid of the mottled parts, (if you didn't notice, some mottled spots were there) re-did the shading, added highlights, and re-did the ear pink. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do that...but, comments? ♥Ice shine★  14:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I dont see anything that needs fixing or the mistakes are hardly seen to me so good job  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 14:32, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink could be a bit longer. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 17:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Goldenpaw on the ear pink. Also, blur the highlights a bit more. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:30, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Made ear pink longer. I can't blur the highlights. ♥Ice shine★  17:37, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are a bit too concentrated, and the highlight on the shoulder should be a tad bit taller. Blur the ear pink some more.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 17:56, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Iceshine★ 19:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the haunch just a little bit; it's still too concentrated.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:37, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:  ♥Ice shine★  19:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and blur it--  Night s h i n e    ~  00:25, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Ice  shine★  03:26, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more--  Night s h i n e    ~  04:48, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It can't blur it. ♥Ice shine★  13:38, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit, otherwise this is really good!  Dawny  01:04, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I lightened the ear pink and blurred it, as I forgot to upload it when Night mentioned it. ♥Ice shine★  14:29, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Errm, the shading still looks a bit bright. It's very nice though.XxdovesongXX 19:48, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is bright? ♥Ice shine★  21:40, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Dovesong meant the highlights. I don't think they're too bright though. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  18:37, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Old Chararts
I know it's Tweak Week, but when can we re-post the chararts that we might've had up for approval? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:35, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

When Tweak Week is over, Bramble will move back the chararts that were previously up for approval - right now they've been moved to a protected page to preserve all discussions and such that were going on before Tweak Week. insane brick'd 15:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. Thanks! ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:40, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W)
All she needed was a torn ear. Comments? Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   17:43, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is fine. But I also think the shading and ear pink could be darkened and the markings could be blurred more--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:05, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

There's a few pixels missing on the head lineart.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:08, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

And there is a light pixel in the nose that should be black--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:10, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken it, blur the markings. ♥Ice shine★  19:11, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, I think the markings would look a bit weird blurred. But that's just me Night  Fall 19:17, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think the markings should stay as they are, but I agree about the shading and the ear pink.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:20, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Squirrelflight doesn't have markings, does she? I was sort of thinking they should be changed, too. . .XxdovesongXX 19:50, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well we went with reality with her. Ginger cats are almost always tabbies. I think the stripes should stay since her other images have them as well. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  19:55, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Not trying to be backseat senior warrior here, but I was under the impression that chararts should only have the things they were nominated for changed? Like, since she was nominated for a torn ear that's all you change, you don't change other things. Although it's as good a time as any to change other things if they need changing, I was under the impression that if it wasn't nominated for other things to be changed, then those things aren't in need of change... (if I am wrong please ignore me XD) insane  brick'd 20:32, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I myself was wondering this; personally I think any thing that needs to be changed should be changed, since this is the perfect moment to do it Night  Fall 21:59, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks dark enough to me, but if everyone feels I should darken it, I will. I fix the pixels and earpink soon. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   22:09, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Either darken the shading or brighten the highlights, but I think either way will work.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 22:55, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur ear pink. ♥Ice shine★  21:35, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I really think you should darken the shading, or brighten the highlights.  Dawny  01:07, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more...red/pink. It looks purple now. ♥Ice shine★  14:50, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I killed it...XP Is she better? Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   00:38, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Poor planning on my part, but I thought I could get this done by Saturday. But it looks like it won't be done by then. If you could leave it open until I get back, that'd be great. If not, someone can take over it. That's fine. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   14:09, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Also, I'll only be gone a week. Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   14:12, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (L) - Redone
I'm pretty happy with this. Comments?--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:06, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Er...was it in the make over section? ♥Ice shine★  19:08, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. The shading on his leader image was blotchy and it needed to look more like his other images.--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:11, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. The tabby M is blurred just a little too much, so define it some.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:13, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I defined it--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:23, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, this is really good! The shading and colouring is perfect. I'm just a little confused as to why he has stripes. . . his other one did, too.XxdovesongXX 19:49, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

He's a tabby. This is great Night! Darken the shading. ♥Ice shine★  19:50, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well, he's not necessarily an official tabby, but ginger cats almost always have sripes. I've only seen one image of a solid ginger cat on google Night  Fall 20:06, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened shading--  Night s h i n e    ~  22:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

. . . Yes, but if he had stripes, they would've said something in the books. Just because lots of ginger cats have stripes doesn't mean he does. . .XxdovesongXX 07:21, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

All ginger cats have stripes. They may not be mentioned, but realistically, they're still there. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 07:39, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Well, okay, then maybe all the ginger cats' chararts should, too. Like the Goldenflower one. You said you made a striped version anyway.XxdovesongXX 09:34, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It seems as though there are too many stripes. Echo star  Getting a tan 15:49, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Too many stripes? I tried making him similar to his apprentice image--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:41, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks better with this amount of stripes. I think the kittypet, warrior, and deputy have too little stripes. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 20:14, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know. It's three verses two when it comes to stripe number. All of the images you named Goldenpaw were modeled off of his original leader image. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:49, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't like the stripes on his original leader image, they looked like thick veins Night  Fall 22:51, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think this image has a good amount of stripes, and they aren't too thick, either. The ones on his leader image were too thick, and there weren't enough of them in my opinion.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 00:33, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Stripes look good to me. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 16:49, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Actually, I like the whole image. I can't really see the ear pink though. Is it the same color as his other images? If so, ignore me. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 16:50, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I took it from the deputy image. I can darken it more if you'd like-- n i g h t  s h i n e  17:37, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink colour matches the other images well and I don't see any reason to change it... just my opinion. -- Sandy star 19:55, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sloefur (D) - Redone
The shading needed blurring, but no matter how much I blurred it it just wouldn't fix the blotchiness of the shading, so I ended up redoing the shading. Since I ended up redoing it, I went ahead and added highlights, too. Comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:18, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. The whole image seems a little dark. Maybe lighten it a tiny bit--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the image. ♥Ice shine★  19:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink. Lighten it more--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:32, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't want to lighten it too much more because then it'll get more of a gray color than a pink or red.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:41, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  19:49, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Either this ear pink is killing me, or I'm just full of total ear pink failure today. D:  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:59, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I have that problem too xD. I don't think it needs to be defined, so much as it needs to be more pink. Darkhallows... Mew? 20:08, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried a lot of different things to get the ear pink right before finally saving, and this ended up being the best...I think.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 22:52, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should just redo the ear pink. Other than that, the image is perfect--  Night s h i n e    ~  00:24, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I did multiple times. :/ I'll try again, though. Should I make it a reddish color or a pinkish color? (Or should I get the exact same color as another image, and if so, which one?)  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 02:58, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe change the eye color to a lighter blue  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 20:47, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine. ♥Ice shine★  14:49, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Which color do you suggest for the ear pink, Ice?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 20:02, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should try this color code - 8f5656 Try that. ♥Ice shine★  20:06, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The color Ice gave me was way too light, so I used the same color as I did on my Coal image. How is this?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 21:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's better. Darken the shading a bit ♥Ice  shine★  02:01, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to originally have it a bit darker, but if I darken it, the line between shading and highlights will be too fine, and it will never blur enough, so I don't think I should darken the shading, but if anyone else does then I will.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 03:04, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Maye just darken the shading on the paws, the legs farthest from us, the neck, and the base of the tail. Night Fall 21:25, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lionblaze (A) - Redone
I redid the stripes and the blurring to match the other images. Comments? Mõŏń    ۞   20:02, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to be saturated a bit. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 20:04, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any earpink. Darkhallows... Mew? 20:09, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changed the ear pink and saturated it a little. Mõŏń    ۞   20:15, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, arm and tail stripes more.--  Night s h i n e    ~  00:22, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken his pelt colour. ♥Ice shine★  18:18, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more redish.  Dawny  00:59, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Mõŏń    ۞   03:24, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Darkhallows... Mew? 04:46, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar (R) - Redone
I think it's not my best. . . but Ok. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   23:02, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks really cool! Add some more stripes, and darken the cream patches Night  Fall 23:10, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Blur the stripes too, and some lineart on the head is missing. ♥Ice shine★  23:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should compare it to the other images. her cream and brown are much darker, and the patches are more blurred. Good job, though :)XxdovesongXX 07:23, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the lighter cream patches, they are a bit too bright. Dawny  00:53, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Also, darken chest shading. ♥Ice shine★  22:07, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Larchkit - Shading
I'm not sure who did Larchkit before, because there are two uploads by two different users in the file history, so I don't know who did her before. The original was done by Bramble. It said on the Nominations page that she needed shading, so here she is. Comments/Critisicm? 雨晶須 五六七 13:25, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink- ♥Ice shine★  13:55, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

(The original artist was Bramble) This looks good, but you've made her a little yellow where the highlights are... -- Sandy star 18:10, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and the nose.  Dawny  00:57, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy for telling me who did it! I darkened the ear pink and the nose, and tried to make the highlighted area less yellow... but I failed. 雨晶須 五六七 22:30, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad more, it's a little bright. ♥Ice shine★  22:07, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar (W) - Redone
Original charart done by Hawkfire98. I redid the black patches because they didn't match his leader and apprentice images. Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 14:35, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the white tail tip. Make the black extend down to his arm. Lighten the ear pink--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:37, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nice :) Lighten the shading on the white part Night  Fall 20:37, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think the black is fine. Lighten the white a bit. ♥Ice shine★  21:31, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye, in my opinion, it looks kinda strange.  Dawny  00:55, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, I don't see anything wrong with the eye Night  Fall 03:35, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Since I have two different opinions about it, I just left the black patch on his arm as is, for now. I lightened the shading on the white part and lightened the tail tip and ear pink. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 14:43, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's just me, but I see some blurred lineart on the haunch. ♥Ice shine★  14:47, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yeah, there was a little. I fixed that. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 14:53, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the black should extend down to his arm like Nightshine said.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 21:23, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Extended the black down the arm. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö

Saturate the ear pink a bit, and blur the white tail tip Night  Fall 21:59, July 9, 2010 (UTC) 21:54, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle. ♥Ice shine★  22:06, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Saturated the ear pink, blurred the tail tip, and lightened the muzzle. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 22:57, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Since it's redone, Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 23:12, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Helping out
To re-do an charart, do we have to be the one who made it? Or can we just pick one and go? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:48, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Actually since we are apprentices we dont do chararts we can only comment and that but yes for warriors to re do a char art you can pick one and edit it (As long as someone does not have it reserved) or if you did make it go right a head as long as someone does not have it reserved  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 16:02, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudspots (MC) -Redone
Sandstar12 did the original image. Anyways shading was to hard to fix, so I just redid him,comments?  Dawny  18:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

lol. I deeply apologise for the awful image you had to try and edit, and thank you for taking on such a task. This looks nice; just add some highlights to the herbs and blend the shading a little more. -- Sandy star 18:25, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions a bit more and darken the ear pink a tiny bit--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:41, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Run the burn tool over the whole image once or twice Night  Fall 20:37, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the tail shading. ♥Ice shine★  21:26, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred the shading, fixed the ear pink, darkended the image,highlighted the herbs, and blurred the white parts, anything else? Dawny  23:16, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading ♥Ice  shine★  14:33, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred chest shading.  Dawny  01:51, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The front paw closest to us should be darkened a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  04:09, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

File:Feathertail.warrior.png ~ Redone


OH NO! I KILLED IT! D: Original (probably way better) by our awesomeness Sandy. It said she needed redone, so clueless me redid her. *puts bag over feathertail's head and pets her* There. xD  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 23:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Erm where are the stripes?? Make her lighter  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 23:43, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Define the stripes more Night  Fall 23:55, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Define the stripes and make the ear pink smaller darken shading, and make the eye pupil more visible. ♥Ice shine★  23:55, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye, it looks kinda strange. Dawny  00:28, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Looks like it was blurred  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 00:35, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks fine to me. It's just the stripes need to be defined a lot more Night  Fall 22:12, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but she looks like a mottled tabby which she is a regular tabby. Please fix that. Mõŏń    ۞   22:40, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

kk. Maybe it's the stripes making her look terrible. x3  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:47, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''*takes off bag* she looks pretty now. :3 I left the eyes alone because I did them the same way I normally do, but if you guys hate them I'll lighten them up a little. xD Anything else?  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:58, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The eye just looks weird to me. ♥Ice shine★  17:15, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Much better! I agree with the eye. Mõŏń    ۞   20:12, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Note: This image was originally done by FxC, not by me. I think the eye should be a lighter colour, but the arrangement of the pupil is fine. -- Sandy star 21:22, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy about the eye. Also make the ear pink a bit smaller Night  Fall 22:10, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, ok sandy. It said that the upload was done by you, so I didn't know. Must've been when you guys were updating the names. xP And I'll fix the eye and ear pink. ;)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 16:23, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Lightened the eye, shrunk the earpink a little, and I tryed the pupil in a different spot, but she looked blind/like a zombie so I changed it back. xD Anything else?  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 16:53, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Since this is a redone image, as I understand things I shall put a 24 hour call here. So, CBA? -- Sandy star 21:26, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! ^-^ *looks for another image to tweak*  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 22:23, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry-Briarlight
Hi, Im not actually prepered to do this charart, sorry, but I think her body needs to be longer, otherwise when she stands up it'll just be two sets of legs squished together, sorry again. And can someone tell me what happened to my not approved image of Pikepaw??? Raffyjack123 17:38, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

First Raffyjack we are apprentices we cant do tweak week chararts

Second they are in a protectd folder so the senoir warriors can open it when Tweak week ends

Read the guidelines we are apprentices like i said we have to wait  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 17:55, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

>>

Birdstar has got it pretty much right. 1. Nominations for Tweak Week are now closed so this will most likely have to wait. 2. Apprentices are not allowed to Tweak artwork this time around, but may comment on images up for approval. 3. The pending images are in a folder and will be restored once Tweak Week is over... which as far as I remember will be around the 4th August. You really need to read the 'stickies' (as I shall name them) at the top of the page (the coloured box). Will archive shortly. -- Sandy star 18:32, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Raffyjack, I don't understand what you mean about Briarlight's image. The blank was approved before the charart was actually put up for approval, so it should be fine-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:12, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry... I just though the back legs are a bit to close to the front...Raffyjack123 22:25, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Jingo (kp)- Redone
I don't really like this one... I just can't figure out what I don't like D:. Does she look enough like her loner image? Darkhallows... Mew? 21:43, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps smudge the stripes a tad more. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  21:55, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

And darken and desaturate the highlights Night  Fall 21:58, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and make it smaller. ♥Ice shine★  22:04, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

To match her rouge image, I think the earpink needs to be saturated a tad. And, like night said, it needs desaturating. Other than that, it looks terrific. :)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 22:25, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Darkhallows... Mew? 23:25, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. Just darken the nose a bit. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:34, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - (gasps in awe at beautiful image) I love the shading and the stripes! (drools) I do agree with Ashshadow, though. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 03:17, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink-- n i g h t  s h i n e  04:03, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Done, and thanks ^^ Darkhallows... Mew? 04:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good! :)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 13:29, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Small Request
Can I please make a tiny request that when putting an image up for approval you put next to the name either 'Tweaked' or 'Redone' depending on whether the image was down for a ful make-over or some simple tweaking. May I also ask that you adhere to what the image was down for please; if it needed shading blurred then that is what you do and it would be nice to mention this in the post so people know that that is what they can comment on. I don't know about anyone else but it is confusing me what I can and can't comment on for a particular image and for the senior team, whether a full 24 hour call is needed.

eg.

===Warriorclaw (W) - Tweaked=== Shading needed blurring. ~

Sorry to sound picky, but we need to remember that we are only tweaking things that have been nominated for, and this is getting gard to monitor because people are not making it clear. -- Sandy star 12:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Ki)- Redone
Original artist was me. Color change to a more ginger color. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  16:47, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good. Darken the shading. ♥Ice shine★  17:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)