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Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
What a traitor. 21:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I never read MV yet, so I can't agree with you xD Define the light on his tail-tip? 01:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the shading on the legs and define the ear pink just a little. Yes, Appledusk is a big mouse-brain and I was like too bad when he died 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 12:21, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There should be light on his chest, and I think the shading could be defined and blurred/smudged more. 17:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 18:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking on his tail-tip? 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly I didn't read MV yet but when I saw he was killed my Mapleshade I went like "Beautiful job girl" blur the shading below the chin and the shading is leaking on the shoulder 15:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The shading was leaking in several other spots, too. 20:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I really hate this and I want to do something else, so I'm withdrawing. 23:39, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Even though im not officially in the PCA, can i take over? 23:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

You don't need to ask just reserve it

-ReUpped Ok, my turn. 03:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading way more and change the heading please 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his pelt color. 18:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, please. 23:29, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

here is the base colour for the warrior image. 04:27, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thanks for the colour, Stealthfire :)  01:34, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more until it blends perfectly with the pelt 01:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thankfully i was still online  01:48, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to blur the shading way more than that. Try to use a hard-edged blur tool with the rate of 100 (if you're using GIMP) and blur the edges only. 14:19, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink and define it on the other ear 19:27, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks cut off at the edges (by that I mean there's space between the shading and lineart). Fix that, please. Also, blur the shading a lot more. 21:36 Fri Apr 24

-ReUpped I tried texture too  15:01, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You'll need to remove the texture, sorry. His warrior image doesn't have it, and you need to match that.

Expand the ear-pink in --> this ear and blur/smooth the shading inside the ear 17:40, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Both of the earpinks need to be expanded. The earpink on this blank usually is literally the whole ear. And the shading is leaking a lot around his pelt. 00:52, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't need to be in the whole ear- that's just a preference that many of us do.

-ReUpped  23:49, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is still leaking in quite a few places 00:57, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, please try to be more specific when you're commenting. I'd say the shading on the part where the stomach meets the leg, and the neck are leaking away from the liner art. 02:53, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's also leaking on the stomach on <-- side of the tail-tip. 19:56, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped  23:55, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Its still leaking a liiittle bit on the shoulder by the underbelly and under the chin 00:04, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading A LOT more on the neck and face area? (Im not trying to sound rude :3 ) ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Not on the face please. Only on the neck. 02:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

You need alot more shading on the neck and face area, as Brambleshade said. And, is the black by the ear 'supposed' to be there? Flame star22  19:00, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

The facial shading is fine, tbh. I'm sure the black on the earpink is just shading. Anyway, this image is looking good, but could you blur the shading on ---> leg? 17:42, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped  22:46, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading.

Shading is still leaking under the chin 21:34, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the tail-tip shading, please. 23:43, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Yawn  18:39, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is still leaking under the chin by the back not literally under the chin. 20:16, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define/add shading on the head? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:36, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

-ReUpped  15:16, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Pelt color is leaking in <=== that ear. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:46, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 13:38, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped User:Jinxiy/Sig 22:28, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shadow under his chin above his chest Storm  &#9835;  22:21, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck 01:35, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

I think Jinxiy has gone past the month limit? 03:29, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Curlfeather (K) ~ CBA
My first character art, I'm so nervous even though there's nothing to be nevervous about! I might redo the brindling on the face (or whatever you'd call that) I'm not sure if I like it. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

You must reserve this on the main page of PCA. I'll do it for you this time. Define the shading on the legs and the tail, this looks good. 00:16, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

My apologies, thank you for letting me know and adding me to the list. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

This should be 'For Evaluation' since you're new. You're not on the project member list, only the table. Are you sure you asked to join beforehand? If not, then you're not allowed to make charart. (I did look first) 02:30, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Anyone can make images, regardless of project membership. That is not required. If they're on the table, then they can make whatever their heart wants, regardless of whether or not they're in the project "member list". As long as it's reserved on the table, then they're fine. .-.

Define the shading overall, not just on the legs and tail. Amazing job for your first that texture is much better than my first attempt. 12:32, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

If I'm correct, the rules say you don't have to be a part of the project to submit art like Snow said. I just put in a request to join regardless, so no worries! P.S. I'll fix and reup it once I'm on my main computer. 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Please darken the shading. And sorry about that earlier 21:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on her head just a bit? It might just be my monitor... Looks good! 23:37, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Try to mach File:Curlfeather.warrior.png. I can ask Darkfire to send you the xcf. if you want. 00:49, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

I did use it as a reference, but I'll try and edit it so it looks closer to it. I use SAI for my drawings, so the GIMP file wouldn't really work. 01:11, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:21, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw 08:00, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, I love this shading. Could you define the shading on ---> leg? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 08:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:50, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Soften and expand the shading on the legs 04:49, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading 14:51, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Also add some shading on the bottom back <==== this side of her tail 20:19, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:41, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading where the back paw meets the body ( on >>> this side of the image in the corner) and define it there, seen as with your light source, there should be a shdow there (not much, but a shadow nontheless). Also, blur the shading at the base of the tail. I love this image. :) 21:16 Mon May 11

Reuploaded 19:51, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you dull down your highlights a bit? The warrior image is not that bright. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:48, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:45, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

I know there is probably just light on her, but can you darken up this cutie a tad? -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  23:16, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the forelegs. 20:16, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Reuploaded 00:41, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the edges of the shading. Its getting really dark Very nice! 19:02, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:04, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Aw man, I know you were just told to define the shading on the forelegs, but I think you can get away with lightening the shading in that area to almost match the rest of the darker shading. 01:44, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, it was actually a mistake. I lightened up all the other layers of shading but it seems I didn't lighten up that layer, so thanks for pointing that out! 13:29, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:57, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 07:08, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Rippletail (SC) (K) - CBA
I dont know if I named this file correctly.... These blanks are so tiny But the shading looks like crap. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?!

Define the shading on the face and around the front legs. 21:37, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading as well 22:59, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source 23:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Nope, it wasn't named right, so I'll go ahead and fix that for you. ^.^

Define the light on the tail 14:53, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-up woot woot ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw 20:52, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blue the shading 09:40, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

You mean blur, right? Also, maybe lighten it a few ticks? 22:25, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

If I lighten it, its gonna look like there isn't any shading. So Im .. not going to do that :/ ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:04, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, all you need to do it lighten it jussst a tiny bit, by 2 or 3 pixels on the opacity bar and you should be okay. Also, blur the shading on the head. 21:19 Mon May 11

I'm sorry, but I have to decline this. It's been over a week without uploads.

I'll take over. 15:43, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reups changes be here. I like this. 12:02, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading just a couple ticks? Not too much.

Reups 17:21, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Cloverfoot (Ki) - Declined
I literally didn't try. 01:38, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck 04:47, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Her back paw looks white. Maybe darken it please? User: Dewdrops56/ talk 13:37, May, 7, 2015

Define the shading on the face and legs, also maybe add some lighting to it? (It's more of a style choice.) 13:41, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Her back paw doesn't look white. It's just because there's no shadow where you're looking. I think it looks fine. Maybe blur the shading on the tail 14:54, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 22:45, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading 12:51, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

The shadow on the back paw should be switched to the other end, I believe, with your light source. Cute! 22:12, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for lack of work 22:24, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

IDK but she looks a little cross-eyed to me... And define the shading on <== that leg 08:11, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

lmao I see it too. Could you define the shading on <==== that leg, and maybe smooth out the neck/chest shading a bit? ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  02:55, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Again, Tiger, you still working on this?

Sorry, Tiger. I have to decline this, due to lack of work.

Birch (Ro) - CBA
ah yes only i can ever 100% match my patterns correctly 22:26, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Nice, please unsmudge the stripes in the middle of his side? Like you can see two lines there. If you get what I mean... If not I can circle them 07:24, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

the stripes on his kit were smudged similarly so i'll let this slide o3o 09:56, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

These two lines only I meant. =) 10:13, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

can you shade the nose or something? it looks odd being so bright with the shading as it is. 19:43, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

i've tried throwing the nose under the shading layer but i'd be told to make it more visible because it'd look thesame as the pale markings under there, therefore i think it's okay, but i'll re-up w/ the stripes 18:48, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 19:29, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to put it under that shading layer. Just make a new one that only shades the nose.

re-up  14:15, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I still see those two smudge lines in the middle of his side- did you not get those when Bramblesnow pointed them out? They really stand out and it kinda bugs me.

re-up 10:17, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

The two lines are gone, but I see some other lines 0.0 might just be me. 10:18, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes /are/ smudged on the kit, so keep that in mind. 23:08, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Bluestar (Alt. Apprentice) ~ For Approval
Tell me if it needs the nick!

There's waste by the head area. It needs the nick, since it's the alt image, and it has the nick anyway. Also, you need silver on the tail-tip and muzzle, as it has to match the other images. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  22:36, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reups!: Better?

If this is the one for TUG then it shouldn't have the nick, as she's shown without it...

Darken and define the shading 08:52, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

I'll fix the shading, but please make up you're mind about the nick

No, she doesn't get the nick. Please remove it. 12:18, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, I have to redo her do...

No you don't, just overlay the linear art over the old one, on a new layer. then fill in the gaps 22:33, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

I lost the file I what I mean...

Withdrawing lel, I cant do her right...

I'll take over. 21:01, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The colors are all from the queen alt. 21:17, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 02:28, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:34, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, please.

Reuploaded. 14:43, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Theres like a line of shadow from her back butt to her middle of her thigh? Idk if you were doing that on purpose but it kind of looks weird... Also add a bit more shading in between her belly and legs Storm  &#9835;  13:02, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:02, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Flowerpaw (A) ~ CBA
I suppose I can post this now. She was so fun to do! ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:03, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? She's as pretty as her name suggests! 22:14, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the most visible hind paw's shading? 22:26, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ Stormsong  Let it storm&#9835;  01:06, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the depth of the shading- it appears flat.

Reups ~ Stormsong  Let it storm&#9835;  16:42, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Switch the shading on the tail to the other side of it, to match the rest of your light source. 02:27, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  02:34, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, as I can't see it.

I'd like a second opinion on that as I can see it just fine. Storm &#9835;  21:33, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yes I agree with Cloudy, please either add depth or maybe tinting it would help. 23:16, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Cannot define it anymore or else whole tail will be shadow. Storm &#9835;  01:53, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? Storm &#9835;  03:14, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 03:15, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Yay, it's my birthday! :D I honestly think he could be darkened if he is dark grey. 07:59, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Happy birthday, Burnt!! =) This is a lovely image. Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit, though?

Re-upped thank you =P 08:20, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Happy birthday! Hope you have a great day. Anyway, smudge/blur the tail shading a tiny bit, and possibly define the eye depth? 15:12, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks :) 04:23, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the eyes more orange- Amber like the kit? User: Dewdrops56/talk 14:00, May, 19, 2015

The eyes seem to me to be the same color as the kit's, so I think it's fine. 20:11, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed with Icebreeze. 09:06, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 03:03, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more- I can see the smudge marks on my phone. It's kinda hard to smudge on solid cats, since you can't get sloppier, like you can on tabbies. (or so said Shelly a very long time ago)

Re-upped I'd really not rather smudge them anymore .-. The whole point of smudged shading on solid cats is that the smudge marks are there, to create a furry affect. 08:08, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Berryheart (K) ~ For Approval
wee~ Probably won't be able to upload on weekdays but I /can/ update on Fridays. <: 14:23, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

It needs a white neck like the other images. And define the light on the legs, and tail Storm  &#9835;  14:25, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

oh god it's disgusting ;;  14:33, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, tail, and the chest please you forgot those Storm  &#9835;  14:41, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

it's still horrible  14:57, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

There's literally still no light on the legs/paws. get rid of some shadow Storm  &#9835;  15:02, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Shrink the white on her front paws, please. They only look that way on the queen because of how long her legs are.

'''Better? ''' 15:26, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define and add depth to the shading? The image is looking kind of flat. Good job on this though! 15:35, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Ice, when you say "The image looks flat", you mean define the shading everywhere, right? Because I think that needs a bit more work upon touching :) Good job with smudging. Very nice. 18:36, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I hate shading ;_;  19:11, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

You are still forgetting to put light on the legs. Define the light on the chest and tail and define the shading on the side of her face... This charart is literally all shading. Define the light everywhere. Storm &#9835;  22:37, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

The white is looking a little grey on my screen… maybe lighten it? Idk whether it is only my phone 06:56, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

It isn't just your screen, it's really gray, add some highlights? Are you using pure white? 11:48, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

I used pure white on her queen, which is the first image in the set, so you'll need to do the same.

She did use pure white, but it's literally all shading. Adding to my comment earlier, get rid of some shadow. Storm &#9835;  23:02, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Latte, check this out 12:00, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I'll remove shading, but I'll do it on Friday. Sorry. 21:59, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

well I got some time today so  22:34, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws and legs... Chest, head, and tail... Storm &#9835;  04:28, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

imo it's fine, but if it's not, idek how to define it .-. 21:25, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

No. I agree with Storm. Erase some of the shading on the chest/add highlights. 22:31, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Please don't start the "its fine" thing. .-. Storm  &#9835;  01:04, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, chill. Leave the enforcing to the leads, please. Vibrant, we're not starting the "it's fine" thing. These images are put on the approval page to be commented on before they go on the character's page. These comments are said for a reason, and no one's images are perfect. Not mine, not any one of the other leads', not yours, not a random warrior, kit, apprentice, whatever rank. That's why this page is here. Your white looks extremely gray, and in order to match the queen image, which I made, you're going to need to brighten up the white, as it looks like her image is black-and-gray, instead of black-and-white.

Soften the transition between the white on the neck and black; it's a bit hard-edged 02:28, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Ferntail (Ki) ~ For Approval
16:09, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading between the tummy and on the leg as well. Looking good Storm  &#9835;  16:13, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head, and the light on the back paw. Cutie! 17:19, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

It could be defined everywhere 08:33, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

The leg, tail, and paw shading is fine, tbh.

done there already was shading on the leg and tummy, Storm, so I defined it. 11:17, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe possibly darken the shading a few ticks? Storm &#9835;  03:28, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 09:54, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Jaywing (K) ~ For Approval
His name sounds too much like Jay's Wing. Me + texture = no 23:20, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a little dark to me. 00:24, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped He does to me, too. Hopefully this is better, but if it's not I'll gladly lighten it further. 00:59, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? And maybe get rid of that shadow to the left on the chest/neck as it shouldn't be there with your light source. Storm &#9835;  03:29, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 20:08, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks a little dark. Maybe lighten just a tad? User: Dewdrops56/talk 22:13, May, 21, 2015

Re-upped 00:49, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt K) ~ For Approval
okay. I misnamed the file by accident- ill rename it in the next upload. 00:21, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

No, please don't reupload with a different filename. It's more crap for me to delete. I'll rename it for you. Also, smooth out the shading. This would actually be kit.alt3 because she already has two other alts.

Smooth out the shading on the tail a bit and/or define it? Storm &#9835;  01:33, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Curlfeather (W) - For Approval
I tried??? I also color-picked from the kit.

I love this Snowy! Define the shading on the tail and the back leg closest to us? Storm &#9835;  01:22, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

May just be my screen but this looks slightly lighter than the kit, perhaps it's just the shading or something, so if you think it's all right, disregard me. Back leg shading looks fine though. Pretty! 01:29, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

You know I think it is just the shading. Just ignore my above comment. 01:32, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's just the shading- the kit's is darker, and mine is tinted a brown-ish color. Anyways, re-uploaded.

Holy crap the texture is so good >.> Define shading overall, love this^^ 11:55, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Don't worry about the kit being darker, the original warrior was darker so I darkened the kit to match, but I'm going to lighten it back up to match this one because I don't like the dark color. (And I can do that now that the original warrior was declined) 13:51, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Raven you're not allowed to tweak images even if its yours. Only warriors are allowed to. Storm &#9835;  14:14, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

The image hasn't been approved yet, so I can still make changes to it. -looks up- 15:14, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

My bad, thought it was approved already. As for the image Snowy, maybe darken the shading a bit? Storm &#9835;  15:16, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you blur/smudge the body shading just a bit? 18:56, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading 06:33, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Sparrow Fur (Alt. Ro) - For Approval
She was called brown in AFD, so here's the little beauty :3 (there's slightly darker fur on her head, back, legs and tail, not misplaced shading ^.^; I can remove it if I need to) 02:42, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

OMFG I cannot do this O.O If you can, maybe you should define the tail shading. 04:46, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Foxy!!! you all know how terrible I am with texture x.x  Define light on /her/ right front leg, beautiful!^^ 11:56, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste at the top of the image above her tail. Also expand the shading on the tail as it appears cut off to me. Looking wonderful sunjaw! Storm &#9835;  03:32, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Thanks all ^.^ I ended up redoing the tail shading and defined the highlights a little bit so hopefully that helps 12:18, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Brackenpelt (Ki) ~ For Approval
04:44, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Oh how lovely 0.0 Smooth out earpink, tail shading and the shading on her side? This is sooo cute XDDD 11:58, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:34, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

want the xcf for this? 18:27, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redone to match 100% 08:32, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Sloefur (Mc) ~ For Approval
19:44, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the herbs and possibly define the ear pink 23:27, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

You have an image to match, in terms of darkness. Lighten the image up, please.

Re-ups 10:58, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. W) - For Approval
- she was called gray and white in Dovewing's Silence 01:27, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

gray and white is pretty much silver and white if you ask me, are you sure they weren't just briefly describing her without saying her as a tabby? I might be wrong though. I love the texture!^^ Maybe lighten the front leg shading, and define the source on her hind leg, pretty! 07:38, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Gray and silver are separate shades. 10:27, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Gray-and-white is not silver-and-white.

Define the light on the tail Storm  &#9835;  12:57, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded On her hind paw farthest from us, she does have a gray toe, so that may be the shadow you're seeing Bramble 21:57, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body. 06:59, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:01, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (W) ~ For Evaluation
Edit:

Ok I edited it. Looks MUCH better than the old one, the shading is much better,i added a pupil, i erased the waste, and i blurred the ears.

PoppyShine (talk) 04:23, May 21, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Hey, it's gotta match Hootwhisker's apprentice if I recall correctly..-- Nachtide  The  Wikian   Squad 07:04, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

You misnamed it, it should be named Hootwhisker.warrior.png. Other than that, match his apprentice image as Nachtide said, smooth out the shading, clear the waste, blur the earpink and define light on the legs. 07:35, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Don't align your images. It messes up the page. There is also texture to match. Define and darken your shading. This should also be titled 'For Evaluation' instead of 'For Approval' since its your first image. Storm &#9835;  11:24, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

He also doesnt appear to have a pupil... Define eye depth as well Storm  &#9835;  12:53, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, since it looks like the redo nomination for the apprentice is going to pass, I'm not adding texture, so that's fine. But isn't this a bit smaller than the usual warrior blank? 14:39, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

It has the right size to me, but the lineart is covered on some parts. 15:00, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

It does seem to be covered in some places -are your other layers under the lineart? Also, there seems to be a random black dot between the ears. Can you either blur it if it's shading, or get rid of it? 20:23, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

I just realized "the random black dot" is a disconnected part of the lineart, so don't get rid of it. Can you expose the lineart though, like I said above? 20:22, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Don't align your images .-. He still needs a pupil. Blur the earpink a bit more as well as the shading Storm  &#9835;  01:08, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

How am i aligning them, it looks normal to me, the pupil and shading and earpink i get. PoppyShine (talk) 01:37, May 23, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

When you post an image it should be File:Example.warrior.png what you are doing is File:Example.warrior.png|left which messes up the structure of the page. Storm &#9835;  01:40, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrowtail (W) ~ For Approval
He has no specific color, but he's shown in the list of characters needing art so... Yep. I love the name Sparrowtail yay :D I actually came up with it before 09:26, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

he has an image that needs ti be matched. its not that hard ti check his page. ._. 09:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Omg I'm so dumb I swear I clicked on his page multiple times but I didn't realize it I'll upload it very soon 10:14, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Ugh it doesn't match  12:45, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light/shading on the legs/paws? It looks wonderful silver! Storm &#9835;  12:52, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  12:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? He looks good! 18:44, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

define it on the legs, too. 18:51, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) ~ For Approval
I swear guys I wasn't trying to copy Berry's version but I was so in awe I couldn't resist. 23:53 Thu May 21

He's cool! but he does look like Berry's version Maybe smooth out the muzzle white, and kinda separate the tail fray and tail shading? It seems like they're right overlapping each other just to me. Nicely done Hawky!:) 07:26, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

They are overlapping...? What do you mean? 21:08 Fri May 22

i think what theyre trying to say is the shading ends right where the grey and white meet, making it look like its a block of shading instead of grey fur. 21:13, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body. 08:12, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Maplestar (Star Alt) - For Approval
She was described as orange in Cloudstar's Journey, and Squirrelflight got an alt for that. I'm really happy with how this turned out. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:52, May 23, 2015 (UTC)


 * Speechless and gapes* define the shading on the main body 03:11, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :D Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:16, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

She's purdy!! Thicken the shading just a touch more on the haunch 05:52, May 23, 2015 (UTC)