Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Willowshine (alt. ki) ~ Redone
Lol this sucks. But whatever. OA was Froon and I redid due to shading and earpink problems. 11:22, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight// define the tail shading. Cute <3 Camrynn 12:04, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink just a bit? :3 13:09, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. 16:45, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit.

'''Reploaded. '''I redid the shading with Icy stalking me on Join.me. She was telling me what to fix xP 19:40, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the tip of the arm near the stomach and dull the highlights? 19:41, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the arms. 02:53, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Guess who redid the shading again. 01:06, August 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the neck shading a tiiny bit x3 07:28, 12, 08, 2012

Reuploaded. I really hate this. 19:10, August 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and the highlights. 01:49, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

I can't define the shading anymore, it already looks like her pelt is that color now :p And I haven't touched the highlights since you told me to dull them. 18:32, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a tad more? It looks too hot pinkish. (Though it could just be my computer)  02:46, August 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:36, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the shading a final time. I like it much better. Changes aren't showing >.> 02:50, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading? 15:41, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" and shading on the legs. 21:11, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x-x 00:18, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading a bit. then blur it - 03:03, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur where the "highlights" meet the shading please. 17:22, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes probably not showing. 02:00, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur ---> that side shading some. 08:00, 20, 08, 2012

Brokenstar (Alt E) ~ Tweaked
Added moar raggediness. Ohmaigod, I love making things floofy/matted/ragged ^^ OA was Breezy. 12:01 Fri Aug 10

Can you make it match the other images a little better?

Can you also make the earpink less ovalish? 19:27, August 12, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? 23:21, August 15, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week. Declining. 20:33, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm taking over, Re-uploaded. Changes are here. I hope I did everything right. owo 02:01, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more "spikier" and thinner at the edges, and lessen the raggedness a bit. 11:00, 18, 08, 2012

Re-uploaded Changes are here. 01:33, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the neck on tail near the lineart. It looks almost black when it's that dark. 13:20, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this. owo 19:35, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

I still have the file for this. I'll take over. x3 23:49, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:59, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Flowerstar (L) ~ Tweaked
Trust me, this wasn't redone. Those little white dots on the tail are from pasting the patches on to another layer, and I also defined the stripes a bit because when I pasted the patches on to a new layer, they didn't show to well. Had shading issues. Changes may not be showing yet Ohgawd I fail  07:07, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

Where exactly is the pupil in the eye? I'm not saying you have to change it, but I'm curious as to where it is...

^^ I see it. Can you paste the shaded tail color over the pixels, it just looks a bit odd and can you make the color match on her toes on this <-- side or make the transition a bit more gradual? Am I making any sense :S Also, this is just a preference, but maybe darken the nose pink a touch? 23:13, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Don't worry, Scarly. You make sense. x3 The shaded tail color was already over the pixels, but I guess I tried something to make it look better. And I brightened the earpink, not exactly darkened it. 06:01, August 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make <---this ear white? It's white on her warrior image. Pad foot Mischief Managed 16:14, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the tail shading? 23:18, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (W) ~ Tweaked
Wee, a tabby. Anyways, OA was Mounty, and it was agreed to use the old alt warrior, with a shading fix, for while I still have the file. Changes probably aren't showing, so look here.

Blur it on the shoulder, the neck, and the head. 21:57, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

Can you add fur texture? o3o 00:20, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do, but there's no way in hell I can match Mounty's.

'kay, I'm just going to ask Mounty for the file to her warrior, and do it that way.

Re-uploaded. I tried, and failed. =.=

Lighten the shading a bit; I can hardly see the lineart. o3o 06:26, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes, y u no show? >:|

Squirrelflight (Q) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to make sense. OA was Shelly. The earpink went all funky on me so I had to re-do it. Comments? 02:05, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Changes may or may not be showing >.> 02:48, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:18, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little more too (make it pinker) 15:00, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink is off of her right ear. I personally think it's fine. For the shading, are you looking at the tweaked image? Because on the tweak page it dhows the un-tweaked image. *Might be my computer* 15:29, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm looking at the tweaked version. 17:18, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dark and defined as it can go. 19:42, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think you need to define the stripes. 20:34, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Here's an idea, Sweet. Why not ask Shelly for the .xcf file? That way the shading can be redone without having to define the stripes? 8D

I'll give it a try. Stupid dial-up internet e.e 20:42, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

I sent it to her. Really, people, if you need to tweak something on one of my chararts, just ask and I'll happily send over the .xcf file to make it easier on you. I know it sucks to tweak shading without the original file. (feels shame over her lacking ability to shade queens) 01:14, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (Ki) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be defined, OA's were Frostheart and Elo. My First Tweak! 8DD Comments? If changes aren't showing, they're here. 00:39, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. And for a first tweak, Duck, it's splendid. 17:08, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes are here. Thanks Icy. =) 01:30, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. 13:18, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:31, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (Ki Alt.) - Tweaked
Tweaked to have darkened/defined shading. Changes may or may not be showing. Rain bow   Fli  ght  14:41, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

If possible, could you whiten the white a little? 21:58, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 23:14, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Unless changes aren't showing, define the shading some more. 03:41, 19, 08, 2012

Rowan, do you want the file for this so you can just redo the shading?

Actually, that would be quite helpful. Rain bow   Fli  ght  17:28, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (R) - Redone
- Redone to match other images. I made it match the elder image. Comments? (Changes might not be showing. I'll add the pale belly in later. Also, if this is not approved by the 20th, someone may take over.) 23:38, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Changes probably aren't showing so you might want to ignore this but lighten him up a bit. 03:52, 19, 08, 2012

Well, I probably should have uploaded the internal link, but here it is. 22:05, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back paws. 22:52, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Here. 23:51, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Jake (KP) ~ Tweaked
Changed the stripes, and shading. I used Photoshop for this, since I'm having major issues with GIMP for some reason. Changes may nor may not be showing, so look here.

Great job Cloudy! Blur the stripes a smidge. x3 04:23, 19, 08, 2012

Eh, do I have to? I quite like how they are now.

I don't know if it was intentional, but the stripe doesn't really seem to follow the spine very well. I think it would curve a bit more. 04:31, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

No, it wasn't intentional. I'll try and fix that. ^^;;

Could you possibly define the shading a tad more? 05:11, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

The stripes look a tad greenish - Could you fix that? 05:46, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

No, they don't. o.o I didn't use black to shade, nor for the stripes, like I usually do. They're not green on my computer. XD

Sexy <3333 Define the cream on the tail? 15:01, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

It's actually not cream, but more of a pink-ish color so it looks pale. I think it looks good, but if someone else wants me to define it, I can. No big deal.

Can you define it a smidge? because you love me? 22:28, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

Can you make the earpink more pink, and less gray? 23:54, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine. Ear pink is a pain in the shading place on ginger cats. x.x

Brindleface (Alt Q) ~ Tweaked
I swear on my life this is tweak. If anyone has any doubts, I'll email them the .xcf so they can see. All I did was go over the image with a small galaxy brush on GIMP for the mottled and defined the sjading. Comments? 08:41 Sun Aug 19

Changes aren't showing. e.e <span style="">08:41 Sun Aug 19

Waste. Waste everywhere. 12:36, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'd removed it before...on the .xcf e.e -is a total derp- <span style="">12:40 Sun Aug 19

Can you somehow make the circles around the eyes a little lighter or darker maybe? It kinda looks like blurred lineart. 13:16, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on her tail. -- 16:17, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 16:21, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more, if you can. 23:50, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Foxheart(D) - Tweaked
Shading needed definining. OA's were Frostheart, BlueOrca, and Mousetalon. Changes. =3 02:28, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

the shading looks a bit greenish 05:17, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little. <span style="">08:25, 20, 08, 2012

Re-uploaded 15:14, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Ki) - Tweaked
- Just slapped another layer of shading on. I <333 Brighty! 04:48, August 20, 2012 (UTC)