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Stoneclaw (W) ~ For Approval
Trying this with GIMP. -- 23:09, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink?Broken_Foot

Define the shading on the tail 23:11, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Base color doesn't seem to match other images

Smooth out the blotchy parts of the shading on the back and neck, and define the shading on the paws and the haunch. 23:15, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Why are the legs farthest from us lighter than the rest of the body? 23:31, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I colorpicked from the StarClan image and checked again and it is the right base color. And in my reupload I couldn't seem to get rid of the waste so can somebody who knows GIMP tell me how? -- 23:38, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Not to state the obvious, but there's lots of waste around the whole thingBroken_Foot

Well for GIMP, go to your lineart layer, fill the outside of the lineart in red, and then use the color select tool to select the red. Then, erase the red, then go to your shading layer and erase the waste there (make your brush super big, for it to get it all). It works on any layer, actually. Also, define the light. This really does look darker than the star, unless you picked from an area that was shaded on it.

There's leaking shading along the back and a bit on the hind leg closest to us. Also, define the shading on the tail, and the light on the front legs. 23:52, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little 00:23, 4/01/2017

Reups --  00:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's a lot of gaps in the earpink--can you fix that? 00:52 4/1/17 (UTC)

Reups --  01:29, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur the lighting (if the lighter parts on the <-- side are lighting, I'm tired) and earpink and possibly match the eye color a bit better? 01:50, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink some more and define the shading and shading depth some more. ~Patch   feather~   13:27, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  15:47, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading around the head and hind legs a little and smooth it out. ~Patch   feather~   16:46, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  17:05, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back paws and near the flank and define the light on the front legs. ~Patch   feather~   18:13, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

So this are the main colors I used for the StarClan image; the base color is 757575, then for the shading mainly 454545, for earpink A59090. 18:24, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the colors! c: --  20:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

smooth the lighting more 22:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

The eye colour is still quite different. 23:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:28, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Make the lineart black. 03:34, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reups --  15:22, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there's still color leaking onto the lineart 17:51, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I tried..but I don't know how to fix that. --  18:24, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try just replacing the lineart layer; some parts look dark gray. Overlapping the lineart layer should fix any problems like that. Also, smooth the paler parts, because this image shouldn't have any, and it kinda looks like it does. Besides that, define the light on both front legs and round out the shading on the rump.

Reups I tried to replace the lineart but that one turned dark gray too. I know it's because of the shading but I don't know how to stop the shading from coloring the lineart. ._. --  18:39, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

The layer with your lineart should be the topmost layer, or second topmost depending on how you do your eyes and stuff. Basically, the lineart should be above the base pelt, shading, highlights, ect.

Reups I tried to erase some of the color on the lineart. --  18:47, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit 20:49, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  21:54, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smooth it out.

Reups Now I have a feeling it's too dark :c --  01:58, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Fox, you need to really smooth out the shading everywhere.Broken_Foot

Shading's also leaking away from the lineart a little bit on the foreleg closest to us and on his underbelly (unless the underbelly was intentional?). 20:50, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading depth. 02:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

where's his pupil? 19:02, 4/06/2017

Still working?

Splashpaw (A) ~ CBA
... not what I was hoping.

Maybe fiddle with the ear farthest from us. Its earpink seems a tad bright? Rainbowmistake (talk) 21:15, April 3, 2017 (UTC)chat


 * that's just because of the how the hading falls. Define the shading depth around the ribcage  and haunch 21:21, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

With your lightsource, there wouldn't be that much shading running along the back I think. If this is the apprentice tutorial source, then yes, remove it. 21:52, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightening the shading a tad. And also, I don't think I need to remove any. I've used this exact same source on three of my other apprentice images, and I've seen it used on many other images, too. It's not quite the apprentice tutorial version - it's one that I copied off another image, and have used thrice with no complaint before.

Oh, I am late  ShineC♉♏et   08:57, April 4, 2017 (UTC)


 * please do not comment just for that 13:20, 4/04/2017

The shading is fine on this, and the apprentice tutorials are fine as well. Stop saying they're wrong; light can be a strange thing and honestly? Y'all are acting like there's one universal source. Also, Spooky, I think there would be a small amount of shading in <- ear, since a cat's ear isn't flat. Not a lot, just enough to show it's not a flat object.

Reuploaded

This is very pretty, I like it a lot. Comments before approval? 00:51, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Rippletail (SC) (Ro) - CBA
I like white cats. 22:35, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading just a bit? 22:57, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:16, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the body shading just a tad. 02:07, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think if she smooths the body shading, she'll just get told to define it again. It's not too bad how it is, and I'm pretty certain you'll lose the depth that's here if it's really touched.

Re-uploaded. I did a little bit of smoothing, but not much. I had tried doing more earlier, but I did end up losing a lot of the defintion and depth, so I'd rather not do much more than this. 19:18, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Plumclaw (Q) ~ For Approval
Lol this is my first queen and I suck at shading. (If cats know about apples and plums, what about peaches?)

Add some shading to the face? 23:09, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the two back legs 23:21, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. I can barely see it. ErmineGlow (talk) 23:42, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

The belly shading should stop at the elbow and round up. If it doesn't stop there, it kinda looks like the belly extends over the forearm, if that makes sense. Also, define the light on the front legs. 00:18, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Accidentally used the smudge tool instead of the blur, lol im too unfocused.

Define the light on the tail, and I actually believe you should curve the shading onto the top of the head, if you're using the source I think you are. Someone correct me if I'm mistaken, but I've seen a lot of queen images done and I think this source calls for shading on the top, even if it's just a bit.

Smooth out the belly shading?

re-up This is hard! Also I really don't want to fiddle with the tail that much, but I did. The reason is because this is a skinny tail, and it's kind of a small space to work with. Very frustrating.

Smooth the shading on her belly some more; i totally understand, i did my first queen and it was hard. And define the light on her back paw that's closest to us. 19:33, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-up short-furred cats are hard

I can't see the <-- earpink well. I know it's shading, but can you lighten it or the shading on it so it's easier to see?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:32, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

re-up meowp. ..

Honeyleaf (Q) ~ For Approval
Can't get the stripes right >:( Also, wasn't sure if I should put "For Evaluation" or "For Approval 23:55, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Nah it can be For Approval, since you've got your first image approved already.

Define the shading depth. :) This is great for your second image. 00:03, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Your sig is changing the words below it. can you fix that?

nvm

Reuploaded Shading depth defined. And I know, I wanted to make my sig bigger but it also made the timestamp big so.. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 00:35, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thicken the stripes on the front legs? They are a bit thicker on the other images. 00:58, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs, define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 01:00, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Her stripe pattern doesn't really seem to match her other imageBroken_Foot

I think it does. 01:43, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I kinda agree that the stripes don't look great, I think they're more swirly on the loner image but it's just hard to copy on this blank also I'm new at this   04:22, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, they're pretty curvy on the loner image. If you're not sure how it was made, Scarlet is still active from time to time and I'm sure she could give you an idea from where to go. She's the one who made that pattern.

Reuploaded I didn't talk to Scarlet yet but I tried to make the body stripes better 21:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:34, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:32, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define her paler parts a bit more, and I don't think the earpink really matches the loner. Also, the stripes should be more swirly on the <-- haunch/leg and the <-- side of the back.

Stonestream (Star) - For Approval
Poor guy. 12:26 Wed Apr 5

Okay first off, that leg is epic. Second of all, is there shading in --> ear? I'm kinda tired and can't really tell.

There is, it's just minimal. I didn't feel like being told to define the ear pink a million times or that it doesn't match, so its just enough to show the light source lol. 12:46 Wed Apr 5

Nice job at the leg :^O Also, smooth the shading a teensy bit 21:09, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems fine, but the leg is really awesomeBroken_Foot

Thanks ^^ And on the shading. It is smudged, so of course it will have a textured look to it. This is actually smoother than I usually make it lol 22:04 Wed Apr 5

Slatepelt (W) ~ For Approval
23:15, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

The shading on the hind foot that's closest to us looks kind of weird--can you fix that? It's kind of blotchy (I dunno how to describe it)

Reupload 03:33, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Leafshine (W) - For Approval
04:04, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink 21:07, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:02, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Running Fox (Kit) - For Approval
Remember the first time I tried charart and it was this one and it was actually awful because I had no idea what I was doing? I do. 17:41, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad? I remember. Your Chararts have gotten better :DBroken_Foot

Maybe smooth out the shading on his chest a bit? 19:34, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

reups 19:38, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

can you desaturate the patches?

reups 20:18, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Mallowtail (Q) ~ For Approval
i don't remember how i made the warrior :^)) 18:33, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the belly shading a little? 22:58, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (Ki) - For Approval
Here we go! 22:27, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 22:38, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

The paw isn't done exactly the way it is in the other images.

Reuploaded I also darken the shading because why not. 23:05, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth it more, define the shading depth, and smudge the ear pink. 23:39, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:11, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

It still needs to be smoothed out. Also the paw needs to be blurred a bit.

Reuploaded  01:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
Shading is annoying. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed out and define the dark splotch on her ear?Broken_Foot

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 17:52, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth shading some more and define it on the legs? 19:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:41, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little more, define the light on the legs and tail. 20:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)