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Meadowslip (Star) ~ For Approval
22:57, October 10, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the shading isn't spread out over the main body enough, could you spread that out some more. define tail shading —  Minkclaw   14:22, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload  19:13, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking behind the elbow^^

Reupload 22:32, October 12, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth on the head/neck/chest area? 15:11, 10/14/2016

Reupload 23:50, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the legs and chest? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:18, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading more up on the chest, and define the face shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:40, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 19:38, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the left leg? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:34, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 02:07, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define/add the shading on the chest.

Reupload 03:02, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 03:09, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the left foreleg/shoulder just a tad. Looks very nice. 20:29, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 23:32, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 23:39, October 27, 2016 (UTC)

The ear-pink isn't terribly consistent; it looks like it fades in and out. Also darken the shading on the shoulder closest to us; it looks too light compared to the rest of the cat 06:18, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 19:06, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading behind the <== shoulder right on the base of the chest that's on the ground? There should be shadow there. 18:51, 10/29/2016

Reupload 20:46, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the left (<---) foreleg, just below the bend in the arm. 23:47, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 00:31, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like there should be more shading on the tail, and on the lower part of the chest. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:32, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 22:49, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Frogleap (Star) ~ For Approval
why do I try. I colorpicked from the warrior. 14:26 Sun Oct 16

Can you darken the shading overall? - Jose1106 (talk) 16:22, October 16, 2016 (UTC)

re-ups 19:30 Sun Oct 16

can you add more eye depth?

re-ups 22:21 Thu Oct 20

Comments, anyone? 23:30 Mon Oct 24

Lighten the shading a few ticks.

re-ups 23:17 Tue Oct 25

define the eye depth

re-ups 22:13 Thu Oct 27

Define the light on the tail and paws, and smudge the ear-pink a touch more 06:18, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

re-ups 21:59 Fri Oct 28

I think the tail-tip stripe is leaking a little bit. 18:52, 10/29/2016

i'm not really sure where you're talking about on the tail tip, can you point it out? 19:00 Sat Oct 29

Whoops, my mistake. I thought the whole tail-tip was a stripe. It does look like the very top one needs some smoothing out on the very top edge, though. 19:03, 10/29/2016

Define the shading on the main body, on his side. 23:40, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

re-ups 12:05 Sun Oct 30

Darken the shading on the back/side more? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:34, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Star) ~ For Approval
16:39 Sun Oct 16

Perhaps smooth the pale part just a tiny bit on the face, and define the earpink in the --> ear

I think she looks a little bit crosseyed. 15:14, October 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry it took so long. 23:24 Wed Oct 19

Comments? <span style="">00:01 Sun Oct 23

For lack of better words, on the other images the stripes seem to be softer on the edges, but are defined in where they end? There seems to be some smudge marks between the stripes on this but idek. Also from the way the others look, the pale should be fully up the legs, meeting with the belly. The base on this also seems very slightly darker than the others, but that might just be me.

I'm confused on what you mean for the stripes... are you saying I should smudge it more? Also, the pale is only on the back of the legs (see the queen, for example), and because of the way the paw is tilted and how it looks on the queen image, I thought that the pale would probably be seen on the edges. <span style="">23:01 Sun Oct 23

I meant perhaps get rid of some of the larger smudge marks between the stripes. And for the pale, I was told the same for the white on Birdsong's Star image, because of the pale that is on the underside of the legs on the elder image (on which you can see it go up to elbow).

Re-uploaded Idk if this is what you mean but hopefully it's better. <span style="">03:12 Mon Oct 24

Comments? <span style="">03:36 Thu Oct 27

Define the shading on the tail 06:19, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, as well. <span style="">18:53, 10/29/2016

Maybe make the stripes a little more pointed at the end. --<font face="cursive" color="FFBA86" size="4">Xaviapaw 

Re-uploaded <span style="">14:49 Sun Oct 30

The stripes still look too thick and blocky. I think they should be thinner overall, and taper to a point, like on the other images. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:36, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Oatkit (Star) ~ For Approval
This is my first time using a different color besides black for the shading and using a different shading technique. Comments? - Jose1106 (talk) 19:50, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and the eye depth? Cute! 20:16, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! - Jose1106 (talk) 21:21, October 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a little bit more. 20:53, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 21:47, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and sharpen the shading 07:25, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

the shading should be darkened too. try using a very dark red

What does define ear-pink mean? - Jose1106 (talk) 12:57, October 20, 2016 (UTC)

It means that you need to pick a different color from what you already have to make the earpink more visible. 09:10, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded completely changed the shading. - Jose1106 (talk) 19:32, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Um, as for me earpink is a bit too neon, so could you try just a darker, grayish version of the color you used? Also, add some shading depth to her shoulder. 12:29, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 14:16, October 22, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the dapples a bit? I can't really see them at all. 19:50, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Her description says she has vert faint dapples. - Jose1106 (talk) 20:38, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

I know it does. I can't see them at all. 21:01, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

Could you perhaps smooth the shading on the flank?

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 21:10, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

The page says light golden so could you lighten this a few shades? Its pertyiful —  Minkclaw   20:05, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

This [] is gold, so I think that's light enough? - Jose1106 (talk) 21:33, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

I think it should be lightened, as she's supposed to be light golden, and she looks more gold atm. Perhaps define the dapples too, since I can't see them on my computer well

Reuploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 22:55, October 25, 2016 (UTC)

The spot where the nose goes is empty. Try adding a nose there. --<font face="cursive" color="FFBA86" size="4">Xaviapaw 

Define the shading depth. <span style="">18:53, 10/29/2016

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 19:59, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a tiny bit. 13:20, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 15:37, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, it looks flat. try adding more shading at the bottom of the tail.

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 18:51, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on the back is leaking away from the lineart of the front leg/shoulder. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:34, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 22:24, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps smooth the tail shading a bit (the part closest to the body in particular) and define the eye depth.

Flykit(Star) ~ For Approval
Comments? Trying a new tint

Nice! Maybe smooth out the shading on his flank? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:38, October 18, 2016 (UTC)

Where's your light coming from? Because if youre using the source I think youre using, the chest and the top of the paws shouldn't be in shadow.  <span style="">06:37 Tue Oct 18 

The shading should be blurred a lot more, imo. <span style="">22:03 Tue Oct 18

Reuploaded Think I fixed what you were talking about. I took my source from a different image, but that one might be wrong so I swapped the facial shading to make it match a different placement.

Comments?

Smooth out the shading.

Reuploaded

Switch the light source on the paw furthest from us; it makes it looks like the light is coming from under the cat 06:20, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Smooth out the chest shading some more? <span style="">18:53, 10/29/2016

Maybe smooth the <-- paw shading too a smidge

Reuploaded

If your light source is coming from the upper right, which it looks like it is, or just from the right, make the shading lower on the right side of the back and higher near the left, if that makes sense. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:36, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Hickorynose (Star) - Declined
Not entirely sure how I feel about the shading, what are your guys's critiques? 02:50, October 21, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the legs, especially <= one? <span style="">15:38, 10/21/2016

the shading by his tail on the body seems a bit hard edged right by the lineart. 19:52, October 23, 2016 (UTC)

You have a hard shading edge on the chest 06:21, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work; my apologies, Ivy. ;.;

I thought that I still had time? I've been working a lot and was going to fix him tomorrow but ok  03:45, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Ivy (Lo) ~ For Approval
 <span style="">09:10 Wed Oct 26 

there should be less ginger on the black on the body, and some of the patches smaller. 19:46, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

lighten the shading some? —  Minkclaw   19:48, October 26, 2016 (UTC)

Still working?

The shade of ginger looks a little too yellow compared to the kittypet image. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:40, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Dawnbright (Star) ~ For Approval
I hate Halloween but I was feeling the purple and orange. 15:12, October 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white part of the tail a bit 10:53, October 28, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth some? <span style="">18:58, 10/29/2016

Smooth out the shading on the paws too.

Reups 19:40, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading on the paws and chest could be smoothed out more, it looks rather hard edged.

I think there's a pixel of waste by our right front paw. <span style="">01:34, 10/31/2016

Maybe have some light on the center of the right cheek to give it some depth, and lighten the shading on the forehead? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:08, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Foggy (Lo) ~ For Approval
trying out textures and smudged shading

Nice^^ Define the facial shading a tad?

Can you smooth out/smudge the shading some more? <span style="">18:58, 10/29/2016

Could you maybe smudge the texture a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:33, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Turtlekit (Star) ~ For Approval
!!!! <span style="">17:19, 10/29/2016

Nice^^ Maybe define the white parts a tad, since they look a bit gray on my screen

Re-uploaded This is as much as I can define the white parts without them looking neon. <span style="">17:34, 10/29/2016

"without them looking neon"??? they can't look neon... they're white. I still can't tell what's white and what's pale gray/gray/ect, though. Even if it is your source that's making them dark, saying they'd look neon seems kind of offensive to people who have pure white.

I honestly don't see how that would be offensive? It's not that it would look neon, it's that it would be too bright from my lightsource. I use this source on all of my StarClan kits. The white parts are the ear, part of the face, chest, paws, elbows, and tail/under the tail. They look pretty white to me. Everywhere else is gray and brown. <span style="">23:49, 10/30/2016

I think the white is fine. Anyway, is it me or does she kind of looks like she has a lazy eye? - Jose1106 (talk) 00:07, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe just show the white more on the face and front paw? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:35, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Silt (Ro) - For Approval
Sooo, here's the charart and stuff... 21:33, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and legs Shypaw11 (talk) 23:02, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^-^ 23:22, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

it should be rogue for the file name not rouge. 23:45, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps even out the texture a tad -- it kinda looks stripey

Define the light on the legs. 23:50, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body some more? <span style="">14:06, 10/30/2016

Reuploaded Smoothed out shading, added actual lighting, changed file name. 15:46, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading, and check for shading leakage on the legs

Reuploaded 18:29, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

add shading depth (on the head, tail, body especially).

I think the light on the legs still needs to be defined more. Add the light on the very fronts of the legs. Also on the tail some. <span style="">01:35, 10/31/2016

The texture looks kind of like stripes more than texture, if that makes sense. Thin out the lines and/or smooth them more. It should also follow the form of the body more and if at all possible, the light source. Some people feel that adding deeper texture to shaded areas will make it too dark, though. Just a suggestion on how to make it more obvious that it is indeed texture. If you need any clarification, let me know. Sometimes what I type out can seem vague and scrambled, seeing as it is during breaks between my daily life and I kind of just fire it out as I come up with it. <span style="">23:02 Mon Oct 31

Quailkit (Ki) - For Evaluation
This was my first time trying a charart, I hope its alright. ill try to fix the things but anyone can tweak if they like! Winterpaw <span style="color:orange;border:2px dashed orange;font-family:Copperplate;font-size:20px;">I'm unleashed...Run.

So, I changed the title to headings. It should also say "Quailkit (Ki) ~ For Evaulation~. And smudge the white on the belly a little more.-- 00:04, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Definte the shading on the belly, and the fur a bit. And the ear pink doesn't show that much. 00:05, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

And also, take the alignments off too. Like, the "thumb" and "left" in the image. -- 00:06, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I switched the heading to '~ For Evaluation' since it's supposed to be that way for a first image until a lead changes it. I also think the white shouldn't be as big, since it's only supposed to be on the belly, and not the chest area

'''​Reupload - i made the white smaller, did a little shading, and made the ears pinker. '  Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run''. 00:27, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I don't want to be a jerk but, this needs to be named Quailkit.kit.png, not just Kit.png Shypaw11 (talk) 02:01, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste around all the body. 02:04, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

'''Reupload - I removed surrounding waste and renamed the file and added more things and made the patch more circle. how does it become approved again'   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run''. 03:26, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

The nose hole is empty, you might want to fill that in with a light pink color. --<font face="cursive" color="FFBA86" size="4">Xaviapaw 

The white should only be on the underbelly. Only put it between the legs. <span style="">14:05, 10/30/2016

Define the shading, and also the earpink color doesn't match the other image.

What other image? Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 17:12, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Her StarClan image has to match this one.

Was that image even approved? - Jose1106 (talk) 19:31, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think so...its not on the page, and Quailkit is a he...   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 19:48, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload - shading, made the white smaller, made ears more like picture (if that picture is even approved) and made the nose better.   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 19:57, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading. Are you using Gaussian blur? --  21:31, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

add shading on the legs, head, and add more depth to the eyes. you can refer to the tutorials for more help.

Reuploaded. Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 02:09, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

The senior warriors are inactive right now, please be patient. With the skills you have, I'm sure you'll be promoted in no time, and onto the critique: 1. Firstly, define your light source. Have a specific direction of light hitting the image in mind while shading the image: thats how we perceive shading in the first place. 2. Try to make the shading more visible to the audience. right now you can hardly see it in the way that it would define the shape and build of a cat. 3. The white chest looks unnaturally slapped onto the image, give it a blur/smudge depending on your preference.

Since you're being pushy about becoming an apprentice, I'm making this stay at "for evaluation". You do not decide when you are ready to become an apprentice, the leads do. I don't know who told you that anyone can do it, but they are very misinformed.

Ok, I'll try to fox up the shading, and I think the light is coming from the right, hitting the back. And hmm, the white, I'll try smudging it, but when I tried it it loved very pixelated and wrong, but maybe I can fix that.

Sorry for being pushy, I was impatient. I didn't mean to offend anyone and I know that was annoying. For the information, I just read on the guidelines that once you complete an image 50% you can become an apprentice, but idk. Sorry again! Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 19:01, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

The leads decide when an image is halfway complete, not you. You may think it is, but there are leads, just as there are in the warriors world. That's why we have senior warriors, a deputy, and a leader. <span style="">20:12, 10/31/2016

Define the eye depth (add more darker and lighter colors) and the earpink a bit. And apologies if this counts as repeating a comment, but there appears to be absolutely no shading on the white. At all. If there is, it needs to be defined a lot. <span style="">22:57 Mon Oct 31

'''Reupload - thanks for all the suggestions guys, I hope its getting better. once again, sorry Snowed for how I acted. I hope this pic looks better now!'   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run''. 00:04, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define light source^^ Right now, it just seems that there's a ring of extra color touching the lineart, but the shading should only be where light doesn't hit.

What do you mean? Could you explain more? :D   Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 22:13, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Quietkit (Kit) ~ For Evaluation
This is my first time when I drow English charater art. Джулия де Мортон (talk) 14:38, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a little more. --<font face="cursive" color="FFBA86" size="4">Xaviapaw 

This needs a reservation on the chart with a date. And also, this needs to be marked '~ For Evaluation' since this is a first image, and then a lead will change it to '~For Approval' when they think it's ready.

Reuploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 17:19, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

I think this still has to be added to the chart^^

Good job! <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 06:45, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

I added you in the Chart-Table. <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 06:47, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

Pretty sure you can't reserve images for someone else. <span style="">13:33, 10/31/2016

Yes, you can. o.O It's been done here countless times. As long as the person who's posting the image does say they asked them to do it, then we'll be all good.

Ashheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Let's try this again, shall we? I fixed the earpink from before, and also took care of some waste. Comments? 18:55, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

wow. its so good! i love the eyes. Maybe make the ear a little less dark so it doesnt get blended into the back as much. Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 20:06, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reupoaded. Thanks. 20:14, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading. 00:01, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

Flamepelt (Star) - For Approval
I only like the shading on this. <span style="">22:33 Mon Oct 31

The shading by the eye and right half of e face looks a little too dark, but it's your call! It looks amazing btw. Winterpaw I'm unleased...Run. 22:55, October 31, 2016 (UTC)

It's fine. Can you smooth out the shading some more? <span style="">23:34, 10/31/2016

Reuploaded <span style="">01:40 Tue Nov 1

Fidgetpaw (MCA) - For Approval
His name is so beautiful.

This is so good! There's some white in the ear pink but sorry if it's supposed to be there! Shypaw11 (talk) 00:02, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

Filling in the entire ear with ear pink is not mandatory for these blanks.

Fallowfern (E) ~ For Approval
i like only the eyes —  Minkclaw   19:12, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit on the haunches? Looks good man 19:14, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Give the shading more shape; it doesn't really have that right now and looks like it's also leaking away from the lineart almost everywhere.

Betsy (KP) ~ For Approval
Was hard without drawing tablet...but torties are life 19:51, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Clovertail(E) ~ For Approval
Idk. And I'll be smoothing out that weird patch of white on the top of the shoulder next upload.

Define the shading a bit. 00:00, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (Q) ~ For Approval
i dont feel like it matches very well but [shrug emoji] 22:04, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

Lessen the brown. There's a layer of white specks over it on her legs, underside and tail. <span style="">22:31 Tue Nov 1

reuploaded did it excluding the body cuz thats free game 22:43, November 1, 2016 (UTC)

this is perty, Trolly. define shading —  Minkclaw   23:01, November 1, 2016 (UTC)