Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Tornear (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA was Ruefrost, thinned out the stripes and added a pale chest. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:45, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

He still has stripes on his chest, was there an upload error? --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:54, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Only a bit. I think it's fine, it matches his warrior image. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:55, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups added texture to match his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:16, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

I just think his chest is too filled with stripes compared to all his other images is all, they especially show there is practically a patch of pale fur without stripes somewhere anyway. That's what I see/think anyway. --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:59, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:18, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Um, was this redone? I was looking in the file history and this looks almost nothing like his previous image, save for the eyes. If an image is nominated for a tweak, it needs to stay a tweak. If this was redone, along with his kit, I'm going to need to decline this because that's not something you can do without permission- and I know I didn't give it.

Eh... I redone the stripes, tbh, but I'm pretty sure I didn't touch anything else besides the ear pink, since it was kind of messed up when I redone the stripes. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 08:56, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

How exactly did you redo the stripes without getting the file? o.O If you just put a new layer of gray over basically everything but the eyes, that kinda counts as basically redoing it. Had you asked, I really wouldn't have cared, since it is kinda hard to tweak that without a file...but idk. I'm sorry for sounding rude- we've had people lie about redoing images in the past and it's something we don't care for here.

Gah, I thought that counted as tweaking of sort :/ sorry, you can go ahead and decline this if it was against the rules. I tried to erase the stripes to make them thinner, but then I realized it was impossible so.... And I didn't know you had to ask so I kind of did what you described up there. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:08, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I didn't expect you to know that since sometimes tweaking can be different for each image and what can and can't be done isn't as easy at first glace. Since you were honest about it and you seriously did not know, if you'd like to keep this image, you may. Everyone deserves one chance and I'm not all for "bam decline you didn't listen" unless it's repeated offenses. This is me being picky, but maybe give a bit of depth to the eyes?

Apologies for my lack of vocabulary, but I'm not sure what adding depth to the eyes would mean. Would that mean to make the eyes darker or something? thanks for not declining this :/ Won't redo things without permission again. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:18, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe just add a tiny bit of shading to the eyes? Like how you'd define shading on, say, the tail? It's nothing too big and you don't have to do it if you don't want to.

Re-ups Not sure if it even looks like I changed anything I just added a few darker pixels. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:28, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

It could just be a lighting issue for me, but the paler chest is barely noticeable, especially in comparison to his other images. 16:22, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on his haunch and head, and lighten it up on the chest a bit. 23:16, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:58, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

maybe swap the forelegs shading to the other side? the head shading is telling me its dark that side but the forelegs are light which is kinda confusing 01:32, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:17, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Longtail (A) ~ Tweaked
Oa is Paleh. Tweaked to be lighter. 17:24 Fri Dec 26

Could you define the light on his paws? Especially his back paws. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:59, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

With this light source there won't be much light hitting the paws so I think it's fine. 20:30 Wed Dec 31

Rainwhisker (Star) ~ tweaked
oa be me, tweaked for darkness. i guess you can say he got...fifty shades darker B) 23:37, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm being nitpicky here, but can you add some more depth to his eyes? Lol Beebly xD 0:34 Sat Dec 27

eh, i think it's fine since that's how i do all my other eyes (barring the sparkles lmao) and plus he wasn't nominated for that- 15:29, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Just because he wasn't nominated for it doesn't mean it can't be done. I think a little depth wouldn't hurt anypony. =P

re-up now with 100% more anime-sugoi! 22:57, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry but can you define the shading just a bit? I've been working hence the lack of comments ;.;

Re-up fiine 04:22, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Purdy (KP) ~ Tweaked
Oa  is Scarletwind, later tweaked by Jayfrost. Tweaked for paint-brushy scar and earpink; and to define mottles. 21:18, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

the nose scar still looks kinda strange, maye sharpen up the eds or something? 01:30, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt W) ~ Tweaked
Oa be Rainlegs, tweaked for being silver. Eh, im probably gonna redo that shading later/and get rid of the waste. 22:27, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and return the scar and the earpink to its natural color. 20:19 Wed Dec 31

Also, there's a line of waste at the tail, and are the stripes thickened? Comparing this to the previous version, the stripes look thicker. 20:28 Wed Dec 31