Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Graypool (Ki) ~ Redo
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a girl? ouo 19:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

To confirm, I did a tweak on it. I noticed you weren't sure. 19:56, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading a lot. 23:42, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Does this shading make more sense? 17:02, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing, reupload it again so we can at least see it in the file history? 19:26, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I uploaded it again but I'm not sure that it'll show the changes. 00:14, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the chest if there is any owo 15:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't intend to have shading there, but I could add it in if you want. 18:05, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading, and the shading near the chest-area (sorta on the neck) looks blotchy. Thin it out and make it less round? x3 00:38, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Duke (KP) ~ Redone
Woo 8D I know the earpink is weird, I'm fixing it in a moment...the collar, ears, and eyes are the exact same, so I'm not changing them. Comments? :3 17:12, 04 11, 2012

The eyes look kinda pixily, make the eye gradient smooth  17:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, I can't really see it. 17:17 Wed Apr 11

Re-uploaded. 17:37, 04 11, 2012

Maybe make the black on the haunch curve a bit more? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 10:04, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail stripe to make it flow with the pelt more. Skt, I can't, because I'd have to paint over or remove what's on the haunch now, remember how I blurred so it looked the same, and then it would curve...I tried, and it looked unnatural. Sorry Dx 12:00, 04 12, 2012

Psssh, no apologise, twas just a suggestion. ;3 Make the nose pink a little less neon, and define the earpink a smidge? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:32, 04 12, 2012

Define the shading towards the end of the tail  00:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:36, 04 15, 2012

I just noticed that the tag looks out of place with the studs coming out of the collar, could you remove it and add another stud? 23:50, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is optional but the ears look too straight cut not like a cat clawed them maybe make them more natural... I don't know how to explain. 22:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyflower (W) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows. The smudges were blurred and looked like blobs, and the shading could have been defined a tad. To me she looks kind of bare now D:. 19:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I love it<3 Blur the smudge on the haunch. 21:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Add more patches, this way it's unrealistic. I also suggest blurring the patches, since they look hard-edged, or, smudge it more dramaticly using a bigger brush like the pervious version. Define the earpink and enlarge it. 01:14, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. Good job Silver! 03:54, 14, 04, 2012

Reuploaded I killed it... D:  14:21, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the patch on the haunch. 19:04, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Which version are you looking at Shade? xD Sorry. The one with not many patches, or more patches? 19:08, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded   11:08, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. 03:27, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reuploaded  22:50, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (A) ~ Tweaked
She needed a plumy tail. 8D First tweak~ *is failed* 23:39, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and the OA was Maplefern, with a tweak by Rainwhisper, a redo by Mounty, and another redo by Leaf-storm. 00:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the lineart, make the "bristles" (don't really wanna use that word, but I can't think of anything better) smoother and more flowing (think Squirrelflight but smoother; or maybe like a very silky, fluffy fox tail), and round the tip and make it "arch" a bit. It kinda looks like her tail got very surprise/scared xD 01:01, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So, something like this? :3 09:53, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the lineart on the tail look thicker than the rest of the image? If so, could you thin it out one pixle. 19:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:29, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make it match the warrior a bit better? 14:10, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Curve the tail a bit more to match the original apprentice blank and have most of the pluminess on the bottom of the tail instead of the top. I think this will help. 21:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (A) - Redone
OAs were Featherwillow, Atelda, and Mountainheart, and I believe it needed redone for unrealistic stripes. Any comments for improvement? 22:07, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lol this image XD Darken the shading and make it slightly redish brownish tinted like the warrior. 22:09 Sun Apr 15

Darken the stripes a tad. Lovely Ivy. owo 14:05, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? And sorry if some of the stripes' colors are off, I didn't put the stripes on another layer (stupid Ivy)  02:24, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (KP) ~ Redone
OA was Nightfall101, shading needed to be redone. I think I should blur it more... Comments? And who likes the Wildy collar? 22:22, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Nice collar x3 Blur the shading so that it blends more with the highlights/unshaded parts and define the earpink. 23:37, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:13, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading moar. Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 05:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:38, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Redone
I probably need to blur the shading here too. OA was Goldencloud tweaked by Appledash. Comments? 22:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make tthe earpink smaller, and yes, blur the shading. 23:08, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 13:38 Mon Apr 16

Define the ear pink as well.

This is optional, but can you make the "highlight" on her flank bigger? 14:57, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:17, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlight on her left arm, and (this is optional) add a highlight on the chest, so it looks like there's a pretty light source. :3 00:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, still.

Widen the belly "highlight" some moar. 07:46, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just realised there's waste around it, and I think I'm just going to redo the shading. I'll upload it tomorrow. 01:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cody (KP) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows with a tweak by Bloo. Comments? 17:53, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Don't kill me, but I'd honestly rather you use the old pattern. We decided that there was nothing wrong with it. 18:01, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, we already decided the pattern stays. 19:01, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Oh sorry ^^ Fail on my part. I tryed to match it as best as I could. Re-Uploaded. 22:18, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm lighten the base coat to match, and I think the eyes should be changed on both images. There's a difference between bright blue, and neon blue. The color's always bugged me. XD 04:01, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

darken the nosepink? ^^  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 05:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 13:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes. :P 14:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 16:49, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (W) - Redone
Yay I figured out a new way of doing shading! *dances* Doesn't look different, but the process is, and it makes it blend at least a little better than before. XD OA was Shadewing, with tweaks by Teldy and Scarlet. Needed to match the elder. Comments? 20:42, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? :3 03:25, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the nose pink a bit. 12:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Uhh rowan? There's no nosepink, and even if there was, I couldn't englarge it.... 13:59, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Well I defined the shading.... 14:54, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Dx For some reason I was htinking of noses :3 I meant earpink owo 15:41, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Silly Rowan. XD 18:01, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Nightstar (L) - Tweaked
Darkened the base coat and redid the shading (cause I hate it XD). OA was Flamingomom3, then me. Needed to match warrior. Comments? 20:55, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 03:26, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 04:58, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. 14:55, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste between his paws, I think. 17:59, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blasted waste.... 21:43, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (ki) - Redone
eeeeee, so proud. *squees* Okay, I'm done. OA was Shimmersong, Tweak by Bramble, redone by Mistypebble. Redone due to Lack of realistic stripes. So, besides darkening the stripes (I'm looking at it compared to the rest, and kicking myself), what else needs to be done? Maple On dA and Skye 21:11, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading. 21:21, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

The chest highlight looks a little bright 02:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes and blur/smudge them and the stripes seem to fade into the chest on the other images, try to match that. Also define the earpink. 03:24, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the outer edges of the chest more opaque :3 07:43, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Redone
Yeah, the stripes are kinda sloppy... :3 OA = Shimmerpool, and then it was tweaked many times. It needs to match the other images. Comments? 23:42, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Eep! So cute~ 8D Can you define the earpink and make the shading have reddish/brown tint to it so it matches the warrior? And I think there is a white pixel on his forehead. 01:28, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

smuge the stripes moar. cute <3333  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 03:05, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly and on the neck. Breeze whisker  03:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (W) - Redone
OA was Insane with a redo by Maplepool. There were so many things wrong with this image, I'm not even going to name them. Comments? 02:53, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah... xD Blur the neck shading? Nice job! 02:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

define the earpink a little bit? 8D  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 03:04, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the haunch shading too. 11:01, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:39, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Bouncefire (ki) ~ Redone
Comments? 19:11, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? 19:17, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that? 19:20, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
I'll take away the pale chest if needed. Redone for triangly stripes. I guess we aren't listing OA's anymore soo. Comments? 21:54, 04 17, 2012

I thought Sky still had claim to this. 22:18 Tue Apr 17

-sigh- If she does, I don't know. It wasn't reserved for her. I thought she was taking a break anyways? I could withdraw it. 22:22, 04 17, 2012

Ha, I was planning to do it when I came back, but I'm not all that bothered. Have it if you want it. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Also, add a stripe running down the back, just like the tail has one, and (if you want), can you move the first part of the stripe under the chin up, an connect it to the eye? 23:37, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

When was she described as this? (just asking) And if you want her to have a paler chest, extend it at a top more. 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:31, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt. Kit) ~ Redone
Redone because the stripes weren't realistic. I know the earpink is crazy, but I'm too tired for now owo 01:48, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Cute! >3< 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

darken the earpink and make it a little bit smaller C:  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:29, April 18, 2012 (UTC)