Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Bluestar (Ki) ~ Redone
Sorry this is sloppy Dx OA was Quietstep with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart. Comments? 23:25, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, why do none of her images match her leader image? I just noticed they're all far too dark. 03:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  12:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 15:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be defined. 00:04, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

-Re-Uploaded.- 22:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

^^ Up there, with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart.. this is not twitter xD. Anyways add depth to the eyes, but if you don't want to you don't have to. 07:42, Tue, Jan, 31, 2012

XDDD Sorry. Re-Uploaded. 20:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The base pelt is still too dark, take the color from her haunch where I don't have it shaded  23:40, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, this is so cute! :D 01:09 Sat Feb 4

Re-Uploaded. 17:44, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more like her leader and other images. Nice! 22:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Brackenfur (W) ~ Redone
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar. 05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D 19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should be shorter; it doesn't go all the way to his underarm. It's just on his flank. 20:50, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? 00:41, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Possibly thicken the stripes a bit? 01:14 Sat Feb 4

Make the earpink a bit bigger too. 01:18 Sat Feb 4

Make the scar a bit thicker. 03:55, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, i think the ear-pink is fine and for the stripes, they are the same thickness as the other ones. Other then that, comments? 18:27, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please make the earpink a bit bigger and define it? Also move it into the ear more. 19:13 Sun Feb 5

Blur the shading too. 23:34 Sun Feb 5

The stripes may be the same thickness as his kit charart, but this isn't a kit. As he grew, his stripes naturally grew as well to be proportional to his body size. On that note, the apprentice charart should be tweaked as well. 04:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading looks... odd, i'm trying to fix that, don't worry. 21:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That's because it's dark. Lighten it, pleeease. :P 21:20, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stupid shading Why must it be so irritating? Comments? 21:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading a little more. And where is the light source? I can't find one. 22:46, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 00:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten or blur the shading, and define the earpink. Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes and change the color of the scar to something a bit more different from the stripes, I almost told you to get rid of the extra ginger stripe on the flank. XD 15:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) ~ Tweaked
She needed her shading blurred/redone, and the OA looks like Sandstar12, with a tweak by Flamingomom. I also tweaked the earpink, because I believe hot-pink isn't exactly the right shade. xD Comments? 01:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I have to go make the background transparent... I'll reupload in a sec. 01:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and blur it. 01:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stupid earpink... x.x 01:29, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. ^^ Just lighten her a bit, as this is a bit too dark to be dark gray. 07:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gracias. o3o 03:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

She still looks a little dark. I think her images should be tweaked to make the color more like Yellowfang ^^ 01:09, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular please. :D 01:16 Sat Feb 4

Don't change her color. If you remove the shading from Yellowfang she honestly seems like a neutral gray. 14:49, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the color a little bit, but not to the same shade of Yellowfang. 15:12, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Whoops. Uploaded the wrong version. XD 15:15, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better. 15:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it more. 19:07 Sun Feb 5

Rainy asked me via text if I would finish this up for her, since she's grounded. I'll be taking over. 18:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the ear pink, and took the color directly from her apprentice. Mind you, I can't do anything with the shading (or anything else for that matter), because I don't have the file Rainy works with. 19:08, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ Tweaked
Angry pregnant Yellowfang judges you. Anyway, made the muzzle match the fabulous apprentice image. Comments? 04:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is a bit of extra lineart sticking out on the left side (our left) of her chin. This is pretty epic Shellyward XP 04:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail? I don't want to get judged 3: Especially by an angry pregnant Yellowfang... 23:59, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang! Darken the shading on the farthest(?) leg and the bottom of the chest. 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is a tweak, not a redo. I only did this for the muzzle, guys. 16:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

They're not telling you to redo this... 18:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

And this will only be tweaked later for the shading if you don't tweak i now. why not tweak it while it's up? Yes, you may have just done it for the muzzle, but that doesn't mean other things couldn't be changed. And thin out the line for the muzzle a bit. It's a lot thinner on her other images and look kinda out of place here being so thick. 20:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the line coming from the nose on the right a bit smaller? 00:50 Tue Feb 7

Which one? 00:51, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Since she said Right, I'm assuming she meant our right, not Yellowfangs. 09:01, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenheart (MC) ~ Redone
Redone because it was a triangle tabby. OA was XxdovesongXX. Eh, I liked the loner better. Comments? 05:53, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like a mottled or heavily spotted tabby. So I suggest making the stripes larger and thicker. But looks good! 05:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thickened the major stripes. I think I fixed it. Thank you Stoney <3 06:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin and define the unshaded part on his tail. -Bloo not logged on

Re-uploaded  23:23, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes bigger to match the loner's charart. 14:50, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  17:42, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 19:00 Sun Feb 5

Darken the shading on the back. -- 20:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:59, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on the tail moar. trolol. 23:38, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded >.< 14:53, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shadepelt (W) ~ Tweaked
I really love tweaking shading. And I have Shadepelt yet again. XD OA was Mousetalon. I'm worried I made her too dark. Breeze whisker  06:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Waste in between the legs. ;3 Sky Dovahjerk 10:47, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks very blotchy, try to blur it a lot. If that doesn't work, you probably have to redo the shading. 14:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bit bigger. 14:34, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading alittle bit under the chin. -Bloo no logged

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  20:25, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur shadings some more. 00:55, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Make the earpink bigger. 01:06 Sat Feb 4

There's some waste between the legs. 20:56, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Breeze  whisker  18:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <span style="">06:36, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Go nuts on blurring the shading. o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  07:23, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading is blurred enough. Darken it under the chin and that spot between the haunch and the front legs 23:37, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading could use a little blurring, but don't over-do it. It's not smooth enough, if you ask me. But, to each their own, I guess. 08:23, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (E) - Redone
Aha! A spot >:D I really like this one <3. Original Artist was Sandy, shading was blotchy, and because the warrior image is all greem and blotchey, Ivy gave me permision to redo them on chat C: Comments? Elork  20:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. This is gorgeous Elo.(: Breeze  whisker  20:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Risa! Define the earpink and make it fill the ear more. 20:33, February 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

reuploaded C:  Better? -- Elork   20:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you move the bottom of the earpink up a little bit. It kinda looks too far down. I <3 this 23:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded~ Better? ''' -- Elork   16:59, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading a tad. This is better than the orginal one you did <3. 23:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded C: Better? Elork  17:41, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudtail (KP) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow, and he needed his collar removed. No reference ftw. 21:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and foreleg C:  Elork   23:05, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the eyes 8D 23:07, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and define the tail shading too. 23:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I made it worse ._. 02:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

It looks fine, Oblivion. Just blur the shading on the haunch and shoulder a wittle more. :3 15:40, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:42, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Towards the bottom of the ear it is lighter than the rest. Blur that part or fix it. <span style="">08:41, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

Blur the tail shading and lighten it more. <span style="">18:57 Sun Feb 5

Re-uploaded. Also, DJ, what are you talking about? Both ears are the same colour all the way through. 23:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I ment earpink. >.< <span style="">06:40, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

I thought that too, but then I realized the earpink is also the same colour. I don't know what image you're looking at, but it's fine to me. 20:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please blur all the shading some more? 21:14, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Towards the bottom of the earpink on the cat's right ear, in the bottom left corner (our left) and around it, the earpink is more lighter than the rest of it. Here is the example of where it is. The blue circle is the lighter earpink. I sure I'm looking at the right image, and I can definatly see it's a different color. You might not tell because of the blue line. :/ Meh <span style="">10:13, Tue, Feb, 7, 2012

That's just the blurring DJ. Could you dull the earpink a bit and brighten the nose? 09:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (RC) - Redone
Another spot >:D. Same with the elder; Original Artist was Darkhallows. I :D. Comments? Elork  23:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely Elo ^^ Blur the earpink and define the shading on the tail. 23:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Why did it have to be redone? Wow........ ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Nevermind, just saw the elder.... ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:08, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. <span style="">00:36 Sat Feb 4

Reuploaded C:  -- Elork   17:00, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading 20:51, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded C: -- Elork   17:43, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (Q) - Tweaked
Tweaked the blind eye to make it white like the other images. This might be declined, as I believe Sweet tried to tweak this before but it was reverted. Nether the less, it was on the tweaking page under chararts needing tweaking. OA= Nightfall, adding transperancy by Bramble and Shimmerpool, with a tweak by Mintstarr and Sweet (?). Meh. Comments. <span style="">09:01, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

If I remember correctly, Sweet withdrew it, so, that's maybe why. Anyway, I know it wasn't on the list for this, but, the earpink looks neon (though, it may be my computer). Could you tone it down a little? 15:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ah, yes, Mintstar was one of the few males on this wiki. Blur the haunch and tail shading a bit. 17:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I withdrew because of some stupid "ring" of pixels. :P Lighten the shading, it makes her look gray. <span style="">17:59 Sun Feb 5

One-eye is grey. XD Make the earpink the same as the elder. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  07:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you tweak/redo the shading? It's kinda... odd and illogical. <span style="">00:35 Tue Feb 7

Reuploaded -  <span style="">05:20, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Brokenstar (W) - Redone
Finally a space! Needed to match Leader image. OA was Elorisa. Comments? :) 09:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is way better than mine was <3. Define the earpink a tad C:  Elork   14:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the break more dramatic looking, like it is on his apprentice charart. It is described as looking like a broken twig, after all, and here it just looks like he's rather pleased with something (must have killed another apprentice). 04:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I had some trouble with the tail, any chance of a redline? Every way I did it it just looked curled... 06:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I can try giving you one ^^  23:42, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That'd be great if you could. 08:58, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Duskfur (W) ~ Redone
Sky, don't say mine is better, because it isn't. OA was Sandstar12 Comments? 13:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You shoulda known that comment would attract me like a moth to a flame, even if I didn't see it yet. :P Make the pale bits paler, and thicken up the stripes a bit. And maybe enlarge the earpink a tad while you're at it. P.S, this is better...>8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 13:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this one D: Anyone can take over. I feel so bad for withdrawing this one 8c 21:20, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over? :( So sad, such a nice image. 21:22, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Shamed. I've shamed Skt's beautiful pattern. D: 00:00, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

So much better than mine <3 Add that stripe on her cheek, 00:02, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I believe yours was better, Silver. <3 00:06, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, you and Silver brought much honour to it. :P Make the underparts brighter and more creamier brown. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 00:06, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - yes, Silver did. I didn't. I bash myself too much. :P  00:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink a bit. 00:20, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Your's is better >_> Stop putting yourself down. Make the pale parts paler. 00:24, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (L) ~ Tweaked
The OA was some user named *Wildfire* :P shading needed to be tweaked. 16:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh yeah, whoever is that user. XP Naw. This looks nice. Could you perhaps darken the shading a tad? But, if it's fine, that's alright. ;) 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:24, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. Nice.<span style="">05:22, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Fuzz (KP) - Tweaked
Honestly, that eyes are horrible. Anyway, i made bell on the collar (next horrible one) and fluffy tail to match description, i can try add the "long feathery fur" if someone will want it. OA is Evanphoto, redone by Atelda. He looks funny xD ,19:19,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - edited eyes ,19:29,February 5,2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes only need to be edited if it's a very prominent trait, like on Owleyes/star whatever his name was, he was named after it, so it was prominent. But otherwise, they should stay the same. :P And I can't find the changes. DX 06:15, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 07:17, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

changes arent showing ,16:40,February 6,2012 (UTC)

Actually I think the tail is good as it is, since on the longhair blank the tail's already fluffy :I -Bloo not logged.

Gotta agree with Bloo here...anyway, blur the back shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  14:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I like the tail. xD Can you define the ear pink? 20:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lilyfur (Q) - Tweaked
This is bad! Original artist (am I the only one who still says "Original artist"?) was Echomist, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 20:09, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded without anyone telling me to I redid the shading again. 20:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Bkur the shading a bit more. 20:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple. 20:33, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Runningwind (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandy with a very slight tweak by Icey. I had permission to redo this, as the shading needed to be darkened, wrong shading placement, and the colors were wrong, along with some blurred lineart. I was told to keep the same style. Comments? 20:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is really good. Blur/smudge the stripes on the chest area a tad bit. 166.249.107.125 20:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

^that was me^. Forgot to sign in. 20:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Like this? ^^ Hope changes are showing... 20:23, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make him less greenish and more brown. 23:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. :D <span style="">23:33 Sun Feb 5

Could you tweak the stripe on his face? It looks more like a tattoo (you know, one of those tattoos from Yu-Gi-Oh that all the badies seem to have) than a stripe. 04:14, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I want only ask.. because this is beatiful, are we going to redone his apprentice charart too? (oh bad question) and may I do it, since Im OA? 17:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, go for it. 17:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely Wifband <333 Define the tail shading a bit. 00:25, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the legs, makes it look like they're darker, like Brackenfoot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:55, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 03:36, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
Tail needed to be longer. OAs are Bramble, Windwatcher, Mousetalon, Mintstar, Cloudskye, Shellheart, Icestorm123, and Paleclaw. Comments? 00:37, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Theres a spike on the far right side of the tail, second from the bottom, thats sort of square shaped. Could you make it more spiky? Great job ^^ 00:44, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:49, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't believe we're tweaking things like long tails unless it's a prominent feature, like with Tallstar. If we are, then there's a lot of images we have to tweak. But I'm pretty sure it was decided we're only gonna tweak ones where the tail is where it's either very often mentioned, or the character is named after it or something. Sorry. And also, I didn't actually tweak, I just reverted. XD 02:32, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I just went with what was said on the tweak page... Why don't we let Thistleclaw's be the last one? I know I'm not a SM, but it wouldn't hurt to let this one be the last. 12:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

But then we'd be being inconsistent with who gets one and who doesn't. It'd mean we'd have to give one to every cat who was described with a long tail. 13:19, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Two things: one, I wasn't an artist. I just moved the file. Second, I think the tail shouldn't be tweaked. Characters who do have them tweaked are ones for which they're known for, like Tallstar or Aspentail. Thistleclaw is different. If we tweak some and not others, we'd be inconsistent, as Paleh said. 20:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) ~ Tweaked
And here's his apprentice :3 His tail needed to be longer, and I saw a bit of blurred lineart so I decided to fix that too. OAs were Sandstar12, Goldenpaw, ~Rainwhisper~, and Mountainheart :3 00:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think we're going to be tweaking the tails, as discussed above. However, if there's some other issue with the image, like blurred lineart, feel free to fix/comment on it. 20:15, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the needing tweaks list, though. 03:27, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind. 03:28, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
Heh heh. Forgot Stoney took this off her reservations. It was redone to match the other images. OA was Icethroat. Comments? 14:57, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D 01:16, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Zooms to this straight away* >8D Make the left earpink darker like the right, and blur the shadin on the right too~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 14:59, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (Ki) ~ Redone
Well, permission to redo the shading, after Cloudy found out about it, from Cloudy on chat. The lineart also looked blurred. OA = Sandstar with a tweak/redo by Bloo. Comments for imrpovement? 20:09, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad. This is wonderful, Rain. 20:11, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ew on ear-pink, i'll fix it if it is commented on. And thanks Cloudy ^.^ 20:31, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and nose colour. 21:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Furzepelt (W) - Tweaked
Just needed the gray to blend into the white and I'm the OA. I somewhat think that I should redo this also as the pattern is odd to me, but other opinions? 03:19, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hey gurl, if you want to redo her, I say go ahead. =) 03:26, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 8D I like this one much better, feel free to disagree though. =3 03:30, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''=P 04:22, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Disagrees* Kidding. Define the lighter parts on the face and tail. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 04:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw SC (D) ~ Redone
Had permission to redo. Reason was: Blotchy highlights, earpink, and a triangle tabby. I don't know who the OA was, as Oblivion renamed the file. Comments? 03:23, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely job dear! ^^ Make the eaprink stand out a bit more. 09:06, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (W) ~ Redone
Okay. There were so many issues with the other image, that it begged to be redone (again). I think the OA is Bluestar, but, I ended up re-doing it. xD 03:39, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and define the eye depth. Lovely as always, Cloudy! 8D 03:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'll fix the ear pink, but not the eye. It came directly from his other images, and I don't want to change that. 03:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/midriff highlight some. <3 <span style="">05:25, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Re-uploaded. No highlights on this one. 05:30, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (W) - Redone
OA was Bramble with a tweak by Mint and Icy, I think. Stripes had to be redone and it was in the redo section. Comments? 03:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  04:17, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The apprentice's stripes were redone, so could you match that image? This is lovely. :) 08:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brightwhisker (D) - Tweaked
Shading tweak. I have no idea who the OA is because Sandy renamed the file. Comments? 04:03, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the white a bit? Good job. ^^ 09:02, February 8, 2012 (UTC)