Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 71

Brightsky (W) ~ Approved
Ugh... Major Fail on the stripes... Ya'll know where to find the changes. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 03:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not a total fail.... Enlarge the ear pink a few pixels, and blur where the ginger meets the white. 03:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :) Define the shading more. 04:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think I was looking at the wrong one. 04:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad, maybe make the gray parts a tad lighter. 11:30, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok,ok, it's good but that stripes are big and needs blurring. Or you can add some more thinner and lighter spripes. It's only one thing.. Leaf-storm,14:12, September 6,2011 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading on the tabby patches. 20:53, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The patches look flat; add more shading, and smudge the patches and blur the stripes. 22:40, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes...don't look like stripes. Just a bunch of squigglies and circles. 22:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay... Huge Revision. I just ended up redoing the whole thing. @Icy, I hope you don't mind me taking a leaf from your book and using your stripe pattern. xP Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 23:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a lot better, but the patches still don't have mutch shading. 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 00:19, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bunch of waste around her. =P 02:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the ginger and I'm pretty sure you're going to have to redo the stripes because I don't think the stripes now can be worked with... 11:28, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Played around with the shading a bit. @Loudsplash, I think she looks fine, there's no indication at what shade her ginger patches are, so I'm going to keep it as is. 02:52, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't mind at all. Blur the haunch shading. 20:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Icy. Thanks so much! ;) 02:44, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to go ahead and put CBA on this. 02:05, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hate to interupt, but she has some waste by her tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:24, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm interrupting too XP the stripes look unnatural 17:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Loudsplash. Her stripes look fine, I used the exact same patter on Lightningpelt's warrior charart. Since it was just waste, I'm going to continue CBA. 18:18, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. 02:43, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Magpie (Lo) - CBA
I love this style of black and white. So, what do y'all think? 00:29, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the white a bit and lighten the black. 00:30, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black so we can see teh shading more, and define the shading on the white parts -- 00:34, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Derp. I forgot ear pink. Also, pelt lightening and shading defined. 00:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Note: Changes don't show. It's the second one down. 00:47, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights. 23:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the musdged parts a little more. I know it looks pretty and all, but blur it a little. (I really hope I'm seeing the right one...) 00:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Meh. 01:27, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Like I put on Piper's loner image, I realized that Soot was the only one who we saw older, and this might be declined because of it. I don't want it to, but it might :/ 17:22, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I kind of agree, since he wasn't actually seen as a loner, he might not get one. Lets wait for a lead's opinion, though. 00:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

But, he was mentioned in the book. We've made chararts for those mentioned, and not seen. Blackstar as an apprentice, take for example. As well as Barley as a kit. =P 00:45, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Good point. Honestly, I really don't know, since it didn't say that he was a loner, and he didn't have an apprentice name or anything. And, Barley had a whole story about him and his sister as a kit. XD 23:51, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

He was over six moons old. The loner charart is for any loner (even if they used to be a kit) over six moons old. And the story wasn't about Violet and him as a kit. They were over twelve moons old when that story took place; far older then a kit. 23:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the beginning was. Anyway, I want this to get approved, because, well, its pretty. ;) So, since it might, you should probably lighten the highlights. 00:01, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Misty. And for the umpteenmillionth time... I do NOT use highlights. >.> I did, however, try something else. 00:06, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the chest and belly. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 22:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:47, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the black a bit more, define the highlights, and there's still some waste around the chest, belly, and between the hind legs. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:39, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, for crying out loud! I DO NOT USE HIGHLIGHTS. I'm getting tired of saying it..... I'll go fix the rest now, though. 03:44, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is the correct one. 03:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay if you dont use highlights, brighten the entire image and darken the shading. Gives the same look. 03:53, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I brightened the entire image, and re-did the shading. There's almost no shading on the paws, chest and tail, but it IS there. I just lightened it up because it made them look gray instead of white... Look here for the most recent one. 05:10, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

There is shading waste next to the chest and underbelly. 17:22, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

...the changes aren't showing on the page. The one you see up here is NOT current. However, I did notice some gray with the current image, so I fixed it. 17:27, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 23:00, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 21:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt Cloudy, but could you lighten the eye quite a bit? It's really dark right now, and I can barely see it through the black fur. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:44, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it. Re-uploaded. 01:37, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. 03:14, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:04, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. 02:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

None, Approved. 02:43, September 12, 2011 (UTC)