Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 190

Cobweb (GC) - Approved
I'm gonna mess with the colors and shading. Just wanted to get this posted. 15:22 Fri Jun 22

Reuploaded 15:52 Fri Jun 22

Again I can't get it to look how I want -___- 16:56 Fri Jun 22

Could you lighten the texture just a little? It seems a little rough, in some parts? It could just be me though. But I am the Chosen One 16:57, June 22, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shoulder shading.

The shading looks a little flat. Could you add more depth? This is nice, though! 20:56, June 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid it (again). The pale is light silver, not white btw 00:42 Sun Jun 24

I know you said it isn't white, but could you dull it down just a bit more? 02:02, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:14 Fri Jun 29

CBA? 00:32, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. 01:41, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Peanut (GC) ~ Approved
pfft i spent an hour and a half trying to shade this, i might redo the shading. love the new blanks though! 00:56, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Add the herbs, as she's a healer. 01:55, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the back leg some? But I am the Chosen One 20:34, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tried fixing the shading a little. 00:35, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

There should be some smaller patches on the main body. The biggest patch should be slightly smaller. And I think the patches could be smudged more. I smudged it across the entire pattern if that makes sense.

Re-uploaded. does this look better? 21:33, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, a lot. Just smudge the yellow more on the front legs and it's good to go.

Re-uploaded. 05:12, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 00:33, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. 01:41, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (GC) - Approved


22:17, June 24, 2018 (UTC)

Define the ear pink; I can't see any at all. (  23:07, 6/24/2018  ) ​

The tear is on the wrong ear. 00:42, 6/25/2018

Perhaps add some shading behind the head? 07:33, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:

22:15, June 26, 2018 (UTC) Define the facial shading. Specifically on the cheeks and neck.

Could you try to define the ear pink some more? It's still hard-to-see. 02:00, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:

23:02, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

I don't think you really... did what my comment said. To illustrate what I meant, I highlighted the parts you need to add/define shading with red, and the parts you need to remove with blue. http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2dcd7vo&s=9#.WzV17rT5ixI

Also, you overly defined the shading everywhere else. The previous image had satisfactory shading depth in parts that weren't the face, tbh.

What do you mean everywhere else? I did not touch the shading anywhere except the face.

06:03, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Also, can you upload the image again? I think it is a broken link - it is not showing any image. 06:04, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Nevermind, I went back and I accidentally increased the entire opacity of the layer, so that was the issue. 06:09, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

I see. I thought I was imagining things again. Anyways, hopefully this new link will work: http://oi68.tinypic.com/2dcd7vo.jpg

Re-uploaded: 06:46, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 16:11, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Approved. 01:41, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt A) ~ Approved
Since nobody took this image when my reservation ran out, I believe I can post this now? (finally back home with wifi, thank goodness) I renewed my reservation.

Define the shading depth just a little bit? 22:36, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sigh, not a fan of this image

Define the shading, and also the depth a bit more. Smooth the shading on the tail. I think it’s a good image C: 22:37, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 谢谢 :]

Maybe smooth the shading on the tail a little more (the upper part, near the tip)? This is really pretty. 00:09, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Ivy. Is this any better?

CBA? 16:10, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, it looks good. :) Approved. 01:41, July 6, 2018 (UTC)