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Egg (Lo) ~ For Approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlights and blur them ,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o ☺~L e a f y ~  ☺ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less flat; It looks like there are only highlights. 02:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Start to do all thing please "Expand the highlights and blur them", right? ,16:58,February 6,2012 (UTC)

His hind leg doesn't look completely shaded, the one on <-- that side. :3 22:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafstorm, I did expand the highlights and blur them. I always do everything the people tell me to =3 And I just realized the shading needs to be blurred... ☺~L e a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 02:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think that shading is too heavy.

Cheshire, you should be specific. Where is the shading too heavy? Honestly, I think the highlights could be blurred a little more, and blended with the shading more. Right now, you can clearly tell where the shading/highlights meet. When I use them (rare, but I still use 'em now =P), I try and make them flow together. 17:43, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk* I made this such a fail >.< 14:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

He's kinda starting to look an off-white ish color. Why don't you ask Mistypebble, the artist of Egg's apprentice image, for the pelt color? She probably still has the original file. 04:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, are you still working on this? 23:00, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the hauche shading. <span style="">01:23, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

D= Yes, I'm still working. I couldn't get on yesterday, sorry =( 11:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's about time <3 12:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his ears and head, and lighten and blur the shading. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't believe no one noticed he needed a torn ear... 16:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more thick and blur the shadings more. 18:47, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, do you mean thicken the line-art on the torn ear or make the torn ear go down deeper? 20:03, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should go back up with the ear, but just cut dont like a "v". This cut sorta looks like a "u". Sorry if that made now sense whatsoever Also could you blur the shading a bit? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on it Leafy? 19:51, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm... I didn't know, so I just thickened the line-art with what Leafstorm said (does that make sense?) Oh, Re-uploaded 20:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You thickened it a bit too much hun. Just remove the top layer of pixels and that should be good. ( I think) And smoothen out the shading more, so it doesn't look like it has a green tint. 00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart from the top of the torn ear. 03:01, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading C: -- Fenris  They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 01:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait =( 15:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of all of that waste. 18:32, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o3o I always forget about the stupid waste Dx 19:13, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look a tad insane... What color did you shade with? It looks kinda greenish... 03:22, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the shading and blur it, and make the nick in the ear smaller like the apprentice image. 05:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs, and I'm pretty sure his nicked ear should look more V shaped. 11:24, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nick in the ear more the same size as the one on the apprentice charart. He was an apprentice after being a loner, I doubt the split would have shrunk over time. 17:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

It's been four weeks since this was first posted. Should this be declined? 02:47, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

It should. I'll take over. 02:48, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:45, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a tad neon. 20:05, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  11:20, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :3 18:27, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more, well, pink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:22, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Saturating it more will probably just make someone comment that it looks to neon... 03:10, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a little moar? c: 03:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:13, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him a little less yellow? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  07:03, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 00:00, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:16, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I might have been seeing ghe wrong version with that yellow comment, and maybe I still am, but his eyes should be blue. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  02:04, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt A) ~ For Approval
Here she is....I realize that the shading could be blurred more, and that I may have gotten the image name wrong, but I will fix that in a moment. Comments? 21:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The filename should be Ivypool.apprentice.alt.png. Just re-upload over this, and you'll be fine. Also, blur the shading. 21:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Cloudskye, for clarifying the file name. 21:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needsto be blended into the pelt a bit more. 23:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and define the nose pink. <span style="">23:53 Wed Feb 8

Define the tail shading. 00:03, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, but still have that "smudged earpink" look. <span style="">06:30, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Lighten the eyes up. They looks rather dark. 22:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes should be fine if you just reverse the depth. It looks better if you have the dark bit closer to the white shiny and the lighter bit at the bottom. <span style="">07:08 Fri Feb 10

The eyes should also be green, as she was mistakenly described with them. 11:48, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste under her chest and a speck of waste along the bottom of the image. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 12:35, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Turns out, I forgot to add the nose pink, and go over detail. I fail. I feel overjoyed. 21:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

If it's a gray cat, then she has a gray nose. Thicken and blur the shading a ton 05:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on this -> ear 21:55, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate the blur tool 02:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Tried the gaussian blur tool, yet? If not, then try it, 'cause I think the shading needs to be blurred more. :P 02:14, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I use gaussian for all my shading. Unfortunately, I'm having so much trouble with the shading. I use Pixlr, so I'm not really sure how to fix it. I 'll play around with it though. 07:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tell me if the back needs more blurring. If I'm right, then I live in a pineapple. 08:10, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch shading could use blurring 08:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:57, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail and haunch shading more. 22:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste along the tail. 02:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. -- Elork   04:15, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Here's what I did: I redid the image. I like how it looks now. 19:56, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear a bit, and add definition to the eyes. <span style="">02:34 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded. 08:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  13:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:04, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth in the eye and blur the shading...? 23:53, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. <span style="">01:30, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Reuploaded. She looks good.... 05:32, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more, and lighten the whole image. 09:21, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur the shading anymore, because it comes out all blotchy, and if I make it lighter, the shading is either too light or comes out funky. Anyone have any tips? 07:29, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Occasionally, when I can't blur the shading anymore, I add a new layer to smooth out certain areas (the haunch and chest/face in this case), or you could try to smudge the shading. 02:24, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well....I can at least say I tried. 06:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You need to blur the shading a lot and darken the ear pink then blur it. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 00:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:25, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. 18:43, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:59, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken & blur the shading; also enlargen and darken the earpink. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 04:01, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading with your blur tool set to max. For solids, it's necessary. 17:31, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Quail? 05:29, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. Reuploaded. The reason why i haven't uploaded in awhile was to blur, blur, blur. It's not blurring anymore. And I've used every possible technique. And I'm stressed, because if I don't get this perfect by the end of next week, it's declined. Any help? 00:00, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

What program do you use? I advise switching to GIMP if you're using pixlr. 00:02, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I can't download GIMP due to my family's rules. Anything else? 05:24, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Well, there's also sumopaint and paint.NET, but I'm unsure how to use those. 05:25, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

If it were me I'd define the highlights a tad. That may be just me though. Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 06:34, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

If I were you, I'd just redo the whole thing. Since you're using Pixlr, it's best to set the shading on its own layer, and just Gaussian Blur your way through it. 23:06, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and even it out..or as said above redo it. 00:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, Quail. You gonna re-upload? It's best to get as much time in as you can, since your month is almost up. 03:18, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I know this is going to be declined. 05:20, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. It's actually pretty good, Quail. 05:22, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Guess what? I had a feeling, and it turns out I have Photoshop on my computer. I can't believe I forgot I had it.

Blur the haunch shading some more. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:18, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define the highlights. 00:09, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Alt.A) ~ For Approval
He was described as a fluffy gray cat. Comments? 17:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and define the shoulder shading. 17:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose a darker shade of gray unless he was said to have a pink nose. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 17:58, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it to the max. 18:45, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to all the belly and chest. <span style="">07:38, 22, 02, 2012

Reuploaded  I redid the shading, and I kinda like it better than the first. 13:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽  19:55, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 17:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading on the haunch a little less sharp-edged. If you know what I mean. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  23:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Where's your light coming from? The body says from the left but the face says the right. I'd say move the shading on the face to the other side and blur it a lot, and it should be ready for CBA then. 17:33, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. Sunny frost  21:54, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

There isn't any shading on the right except Shelly. 22:16, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and blur the haunch shading. 22:07 Sun Mar 4

Please work on this or it will be declined. 08:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:09, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and I think there is waste, it might just be my eyes. 21:35, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's no waste. 8D 22:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yup I agree with Skye. Now I think the shading on the back could be blured a little bit more. Maybe darken the shading on the face while lightening it by the tail. Too confusing? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   22:42, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur ze haunch shading plz (Chatspeak bad x.x) <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  07:01, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the earpink. 16:28, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

What's your light source? It seems to be coming from all over the place. 00:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Lo) ~ For Approval
Ooh, my third loner. And the last one. >:D Comments? 20:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shoulder shading. Lovely Mooneh ^^ 22:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly thicken the lineart on the color to match with the lineart of the loner. Wonderful! :3 22:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thankies :3 22:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a little more or smudge the fur into the ear a tad? :3 22:59, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and eye depth. Looks good, Mooneh! 06:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the long wait. I lost the .pdn (the original file with layers) so I couldn't mess anything up for a while. I have the .pdn on another computer, but it's an hour's drive away. I'm trying to get the file sent to me, so, don't say anything about fixing the tail shading, because I didn't. I just defined the eye depth. :3 11:32, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, maybe the color a bit thinner, the teeth a bit rounder (they kinda look like shark teeth) and define the shading on the neck, collar, teeth, and head. 03:06, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Scarlet, the teeth do match pixel for pixel the same as the last loner image, but, I can round them if you want me to. :3 11:39, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel of waste under his tail~ ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 14:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined tail shading, smudged pelt into earpink, and (hopefully) got rid of the waste under the tail. I lightened it, too. 22:41, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the collar thinner and straighter. 23:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the shoulder. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 00:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is still there o3o it's trapped between the hind leg farthest from us and the tail~ *stinks at explaining things* :|3 ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 03:56, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the stomach/belly. 03:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The changes aren't showing; I blurred the shading on flank/shoulder, went through every layer and got rid of waste, but I hate to say it, I can't make the collar thinner. I can re-do it if you want me to, but -cough-itwaskindofhard-cough-. 09:59, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading some and smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more....and define rhe shading on the front leg if there is any. *is shot* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 11:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken up the back and back leg shading because it looks like it's like, reaaaaly bright. Then blur it and the ear pink. I l0ve the collar! Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  03:38, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

I won't have the .pdn until Friday at the latest, so I won't work on it since then. Is that okay? *derp* 10:39, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, why not? Unless another senior warrior disagrees, we can wait for Friday. 17:34, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I found the .pdn 8D...I know it looks a bit darker, but...yeah. Skye helped me with the shading (fail) on join.me, so it should be good...I'll fix the collar later once I can catch Shelly or Ivy on chat. 22:41, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading..and you could just leave a message on their talk page :P 02:51, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? (Aside from the collar). 20:33, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the rogue. 21:16, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I see waste. >.> Bah, I'll fix it later. 13:20, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink~ :3 00:17, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

...It is. o3o. If I blur it more, it'll be too 'spaced', and some of the gray will show on the ear. 15:29, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind then.. :s Lower the opacity on the earpink, and there's a speck of waste at the part when his tail meet the back leg farthest from us. 15:47, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 16:05, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya lighten up or blur those blotches of darker shading on the belly and haunch? c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke 11:18, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the collar (I hope). I can't blur that without blurring the rest of the shading along with it. Sorry, I can try to make it lighter if it helps. 21:20, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy(Did I spell that right?) blur/smudge it. 00:15, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add shading to the paw/legs farthest from us? ^^ 01:44, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) ~ For approval
☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:15, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, like a lot XD 16:17, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur it too >8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 16:18, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

The light sorce is from above, so the light wouldnt reach under neith so it would be very dark x: Me and Stoneh had this conversation on a different loner~ ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:22, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it a smidge, then? :3 16:50, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Kay~ Reuploaded-- changes not showing o3o ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 16:55, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the brown paws? 23:25, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  ♡  P  o  u  n  c  e  y  !         ♡ 00:14, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Please lighten the shading on the legs. I realize where the light's hitting, but, it seems too dark..and it bothers me. 11:53, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think that she should have more stripes on her legs... 11:58, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I added highlights to the legs. :3 I won't add any more stripes because I copied the kittypet image. ♡ P  o  u  n  c  e  y  !         ♡ 16:19, February 26, 2012 (UTC) It may just be my stupid  computer, but the shading looks like it's tinted green. 17:16, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's your computer o3o 18:07, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, when I see all of Sasha's pixels side-by-side, the colour on yours seems a little too yellow, make her slightly red? 18:40, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Make those higher stripes lighter to blend in with the pelt. 23:18, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are fine, they looks the same on the other chararts. Can you lighten the shading just a t'eensy winsy bit more? '^^ 20:56, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the two back paws and the tail. 13:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Sorry for the wait :x 00:45, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 06:16 Sun Mar 4

Sorry, but the color still seems off and the shading placement looks flat. If it isn't showing, then I apologize. 01:02, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 21:37, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is fine in darkness, it's dark/light enough. 16:27, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Ew, Sol again >.< Comments? 01:08 Sun Mar 4

This is gorgeous. On the hind leg, can you maybe smudge the black into the red or vice-versa just a tad? Als, define the earpink. Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 03:39, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D 03:50 Sun Mar 4

Hate to say this Mountain, but he hasn't been accepted as a warrior in the manga yet. I'm not sure this would count. 04:38, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

He's already got a warrior image, so this counts, Scarlet. 06:18, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. >8| <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke 11:15, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights~ 13:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Sweet I get to keep this Thank you Cloudy ^^ There wasn't any highlights so I darkened the shading. 15:53 Sun Mar 4

Smudge the ginger/red patches a bit more 22:34, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:42 Sun Mar 4

This is wonderful, Mountain! =D But the white parts look a bit pinkish to me, at least on my computer... >.< 01:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Is that triangular patch of gray between the front legs (the ones in front that we see) is that supposed to be there? And the foot on the other side of him (the one not turned to us) that looks gray, match the shading gray on the other back paw with the one on the hind back paw. Like on his kittypet image. Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 01:59, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I know that he was shown somewhat pinkish of the Beyond the Code cover, but on the Long Shadows cover it looks more white. Mind tweaking it to look ever so slightly more white? :3 11:06, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, guys? The color's fine. It needs to match the kittypet image, which it does in terms of color. If you had an issue with the color, you should have said something when the kittypet was up for approval. The colors have to match. 17:39, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yes, I had all of the colors from the kittypet. @WooWoo that patch is supposed to be there, it's his underbelly. 03:24 Tue Mar 6

Cloudy adores Sol. Cloudy shall CBA this image. 04:32, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

I was looking at the manga, and shouldn't there be four different colors on the tail? Not just white, black, and red/ginger? I apologize if I'm wrong. x: 01:32, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

What color would it be? There's only ever been three of his colors shown in actual color. I mean, you're right, but, there's no way to tell what color it should be. 04:05, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ruby (Lo) - For Approval
So I have Ruby, Redstar, and Rowanclaw for approval xD Comments? 03:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

It... it... she looks really... really nice. Could you maybe lighten the shading a little more, near the tail? Clover day  Woo ♣♣ 03:39, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the two legs that are...er...supposed to be shaded. *doesn't know how to say it otherwise* It's the legs that are on the left of the cat. :3 11:03, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly and shoulder shading a bit. 11:13, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the highlights (if there are any)~ 12:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the shading and the 'highlights' with the pelt more. 21:40, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define a light source. Breeze whisker  05:06, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Breeze, could you explain better? What should I change? 20:10, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think she means that there's lught coming from the front, but also on the back of the tail, ehich doesn't make sense. o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  00:24, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

The light's not coming from the front, it's coming from where we are... Probably my shiny loonies. 01:33, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Oakstep (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yay! I was browsing last night and found this! Then I resvered it today and made it in twenty minuets. Tried my best to copy it. Comments? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  01:07, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes you have now thinner and add more. Blur the earpink too. 01:08 Tue Mar 6

His elder is also lighter. No just highlights, but all over. Breeze whisker  05:03, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't lighten it too much because I got the colors from the elder. Also I added a stripe or two and thinned almost all of the stripes. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  00:21, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  02:08, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes more "zig-zaggy" like the elder's image, and darken the overall shading. 03:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (Lo) ~ For Approval
If Frostfur and the other elders get one, so does she. Anyways, this is the style I want to remake her images into, so no whining that it does not match her other ones. 04:28, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ish so purdy *u* Define the neck shading <333 04:32 Tue Mar 6

Re-uploaded. I also gave her a little color. 04:56, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and blur the haunch shading :3 01:37, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:41, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt Lo) - For Approval
Kay, got this bad boy done and I must say, I'm pretty happy with how he came out. In Long Shadows, I'm pretty sure he was considered a loner in it, and we agreed the Long Shadows cover counts. Comments for improvement? 16:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. :3 19:49, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on his belly a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:16, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Lo) For Approval


Browsing and I found a kitty I could do: Minty! I actually like this one, sort of. Comments? 02:45, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I thought she was a rogue? 02:48, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Says she's currently a loner, and listed under the loner category: Minty Loner (see list of loners, under M) 02:54, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm. She stays. Define the shading. Not bad, Woo. 03:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. 03:14, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred line-art on the base of the tail and haunch. Also, could you define the highlights? :3 03:52, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and highlights. 04:20, March 7, 2012 (UTC)