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Bluestar (D) - For Approval
Had trouble with the eyes, I'll redo them in the next upload, be nice if I did something wrong. --Gardenglaze 02:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

ear should be ripped. 02:30, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please reupload under File:Bluestar.deputy.png? Your original file has two .png's, so I renamed it, but please upload under this file name. 03:00, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure velvetmoon has already got this reserved. 03:20, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I should quit this and let velvetmoon take over? --Gardenglaze 04:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I apologise if this offends anyone. But I do have both Bluestar and Oakheart reserved. I will be posting the images soon. 15:05, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Upload thought I would just upload on this. 20:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading. 21:19, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe give it a little more depth towards the base of the tail? Some volume, so to speak? 22:49 Mon Jun 27

crop this to the lineart. 21:11, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make sure it consistently fills the area 04:13, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Got it to look better with smudged shading though I'm not 100% sure I like it. 12:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 12:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the butt please?  18:42 Wed Jun 29 

Reupload butt shading has been expanded! :) 10:21, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth out the head and tail shading a bit? 02:47 Fri Jul 1

Reupload 08:59, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more. 21:19, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smooth as I'm gonna get it! 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks really hard edged compared to all her other images. Are you sure you can't smooth it more, or maybe even lighten it? 01:43, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I thought shading was an artists choice. But I blurred it insted of smudged it so it matches. 05:54, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. Also, shading is artist's choice.

Reupload I smoothed it a lot more now I hate it but if smooth shading is what you want here you go! 09:45, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the image should be cropped... 16:16 Fri Jul 8

Um it is cropped. 17:41, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light a lil on the near back foot? Also, it might just be me but I think the shading's leaking from the lineart a bit on her tail.  21:36 Sat Jul 9 

Shade more along the bottom edge of the cheek, if that makes sense? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:28, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be cropped to the lineart. There's too much extra space on <-- side of the image.

Reupload I can't crop it anymore or else the tail Will be gone. My program only allows for even cropping on both sides. I don't see why I have to crop it when the lineart artist can't? 09:32, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and maybe expand it a little. 13:43, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 14:41, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Right now the shading is too hard edged, can you smooth it more? 20:55, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload  23:52, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. I'm not saying blur it, but look at the various other images that have smudged shading and see what they do.

Reupload 16:49, July 13, 2016 (UTC) I can't work out why I'm struggling so much! 16:49, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Did you accidentally hide the earpink layer under the base? I can't see the earpink... 17:41, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading; it looks very rough right now --  19:33, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. Unless when you smooth it out you plan on making it more of a gradient. And perhaps lighten it a tiny bit. Not much, just a few ticks. The shading is so solid and that might be why it looks flat. 19:47 Wed Jul 13

Reupload Played around with the shading but I'm not going to lighten it unless someone else says. 21:44, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be smoothed out more but I don't think it needs to be lightened. 00:59, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry but what do you mean by smooth it out? It's smudged shading and there is other images on this wiki with shading that needs smoothed out more than this. I can't smooth it out unless I make it blurred shading which I hate! Please can someone explain why it needs to be smoothed out and what that is meant to look like. 09:27, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) ~ For Evaluation
Here's hoping this one gets approved ;) -- 21:01, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading? 1:06 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded --  01:27, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Could you tone down the earpink? It seems very neon atm. 01:41 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded -- 02:51 July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his face a little more noticeable? I know it's there, but I can barely see it. 07:57, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

should this guy even have an image? his page only says 'a dark tom', which could mean any colour. 09:40, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you lighten him. His previous image was grey and this looks black. 09:49, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Matching the previous image is not required. Also, I'm not sure if he should have the image either, tbh.

Because of his name, and the way his description is phrased, I think his stripe should be lighter than his base, personally. 15:41 Thu Jul 7

That's an assumption, though. It's fine being darker or lighter, and we don't make descriptions match what we think it could mean... it's fine as it is.

Re-Uploaded --  17:39, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink? Also on the topic of "should he even have an image", I think it's relevant to point out that Rubblepaw is also described as a dark tom and he doesn't get an image.  20:26 Thu Jul 7 

Re-Uploaded (Shouldn't discussions go on PCA talk page like the should Silvermask have an image?) --  20:34, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

He looks black to me, I can't see anything on this image bar the ear pink. Also, the ear pink is a bit neon.

Re-Uploaded --  16:19, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? --  18:12, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

There seems to be an un-filled white pixel on the right-ish side of his face

Re-Uploaded --  00:23, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add more eye depth? (Basically add a darker green on the edge)

Re-Uploaded --  18:47, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

I cannot tell what is shading (if there is any) and what is markings. If there is shading, define it and define your light source, as I can't distinguish one atm. 19:50 Wed Jul 13

On his page it says he's got a grey stripe but I don't see the stripe could you possibly add it or if its there define it. 20:36, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded (As for the stripe, it is there but it is black because the other images have it black. --  18:56, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

What other images? He doesn't have any other images, and since this is his only one, shouldn't it reflect his description and have a gray stripe? There's also waste along the back

Mudpuddle (D) - CBA
I actually really like this. Since matching the previous image isn't mandatory, I totally did something else... wanted to redo his image anyways.

Define tail shading -- 17:40, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on his legs. Cloudy, this looks awesome! Did you base it off a picture or did it just come into your mind? 09:27, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nope. None of my images are based off real life pictures of cats, actually.

CBA? 15:36, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D Alt2) - Declined
Meh.  23:38 Thu Jul 7 

Could you blur/smudge the ear shading a little? another really pretty image shinx !! 21:54 Sat Jul 9

There's a few pixels of earpink waste near the right ear-tip

Still working?

Declined due to lack of work; sorry, Shinx. ;-;

(may i like. take it back. and reupload in a lil bit. just now remembered i had it. oops. sorry.)  18:35 Thu Jul 14 

Owlstar (SotC)(D) ~ For Approval
Comments? I'm not too fond of the shading on this

Don't his eyes need to be bigger? Also, blur a shading a little more. 01:04, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

The eyes look fine to me. Could you expand the facial shading some? 01:36 Sun Jul 10

No they need to be bigger because Owlstar is known for his big eyes. 02:38, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

It might just be me, but I'm pretty sure there are a few un-filled, white pixels on the bottom of the tail and back of the haunch. <span style="">10:44 Sun Jul 10

Maybe it's just my eyes, but it looks like there's some shading leaking by his tail. 15:09, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Now there's a few unfilled pixels toward the top-left part of the tail. <span style="">13:47 Mon Jul 11

Reuploaded I'm not quite sure why those appeared, but they should be gone now.

Bramblestar (D) - For Approval
Since I did most of his images all the colors are from them. 01:24, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading? <span style="">02:42, 07/10/2016

I'm pretty sure the bottom of his tail shouldn't be lighter in color, it isn't like that on any of the other images. <span style="">13:42 Sun Jul 10

You're missing the dorsal stripe on the top part of the tail, and Maple's right. The pale part shouldn't be on his tail. Also, the pale parts on the leader look a bit more blurred than this does.

The pale part is like that on his deputy (his former deputy) but sure I'll remove it since this is technically a redo. 16:19, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Sorry if this looks weird, his image is extremely dark on my screen so it's hard to see it properly. 02:09, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Forgot the dorsal stripe, sorry, I'll add that in the next upload. 02:21, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 00:58, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Harespring (D) ~ For Approval
Very unhappy with the shading :/ Comments? <span style="">10:42 Sun Jul 10

Define the shading 10:52, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Decided to change the direction of the shading, but it's still more defined than it was before. <span style="">14:24 Sun Jul 10

The shading is leaking away from the lineart a little on the belly, and could you smudge the earpink a tad?

Re-uploaded <span style="">09:10 Mon Jul 11

Lighten up the shading a bit; it's looking far too dark (and my screen's on maximum brightness as I type this). Also smooth it out a tad.

Kinda minor but his other images have a brown on the belly and 3 brown paws.

Re-uploaded <span style="">14:56 Tue Jul 12

Can you add shading to his chin?

Re-uploaded <span style="">14:25 Wed Jul 13

Alright so because I'm tired, I decided to do it this way. The red and blue areas are where you need to shrink the brown. The brown doesn't go down to the base of the tail on the warrior (which is the first in the set), and also doesn't go the entire way up the neck; it stops at the bottom of it, and this has it going a little too far up... and there's a tiny circled red spot on the arm that also shouldn't be there; as you can see on the apprentice, it doesn't show up on the arm, which this makes it seem like it's there. It's difficult to see on the warrior, but the apprentice was also made by me and follows (roughly) the same pattern.

Re-uploaded <span style="">08:45 Thu Jul 14

Ashfoot(D) ~ For Approval
Comments?

define the shading a little bit and. Falcon 49 (talk) 12:17, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the transition between the shading and the lighter areas.

Reuploaded

Oakheart (D) - CBA
12:45, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Awesome work! I don't see anything that should be changed. Falcon 49 (talk) 09:53, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

I agree with that statement. CBA?

Mistystar (Alt D) - CBA
12:59, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Shellheart (D) - for evaluation
Leaking shading will be fixed later.

I know i sholdn't ask this yet, but please, could you start posting your comments? I'm leaving on friday 15, so I don't have much time. Falcon 49 (talk) 12:13, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

I get that you're leaving, but it clearly says to not ask for comments until three days have passed. If you continue to do this, your image will be declined in the future. That being said, there's waste around the entire image, and please do not thumb or align your images.

Can you define the pattern on parts where the image is shaded? It's very hard to see in those areas. Maybe tinting the shading will help.

'''Reuploaded. '''Falcon 49 (talk) 13:13, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, this needs a date on the chart to be a complete reservation

It's ok, I'll add the date Falcon 49 (talk) 13:17, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Falcon 49 (talk) 13:26, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the lighter part in his pelt it doesn't match his other images. Also there is waste by the tail. 09:23, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Falcon 49 (talk) 09:47, July 14, 2016 (UTC)'''

There seems to be many unfilled white pixels around the edge of the lineart

Could you define the shading a little? 15:28, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Alt. D) ~ For Approval
Comments? 13:10, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Shading looks to be leaking near the belly/haunch area. There's a lighter spot there where it should be darker.

Reuploaded. If you mean the lighter area above the eye, he has that in the manga. 13:24, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

No.... I was talking about the belly area, as I specified. I already knew about the lighter area above his eye and how it's supposed to be there. Define the overall shading a bit.

Reuploaded. Ah, I see. Sorry, I just thought you were talking about two different things. 13:29, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Blackstar (D) - For Approval
Do not comment on the fact he's missing the patchy fur. I already know and I'm working on a way to get it to work with this blank, plus the fact I suck at those kinds of things.

Re-uploaded. Eh, might ask David for a bit of advice on this one... I can't do patches.

Cinderfur (D) - For Approval
will fix hard-edged shading later 00:41, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * Re-uploaded 01:31, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

There's a bit of shading that looks hard-edged on the back paw closest to us. 15:32, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:38, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Mistfeather (Ki) - For Approval
01:31, July 14, 2016 (UTC)