Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3  03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.) 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. 12:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink and blur them higlights. x3  21:24, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste below the stomach. 21:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tear the ear. 03:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots more. 18:24, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... I'm gonna have a huge quitter moment but a) I hate this image, b) my blur tool won't blur the shading anymore, c) this'll take me much longer then the two week timespan d) I hate this image! So I'm withdrawing this. Anyone who wants this may have it. 23:55, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this. :3 02:12, 28, 04, 2012

Make the earpink more red. 00:11, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded -  Meh, this is a fail. And Sunnyfrost, if someone has volenteered to take over an image and they haven't uploaded yet, please don't comment. 02:07, 29, 04, 2012

Blur the mid-shading a bit, and get rid of the white specks on the tail and front paw. 04:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add the torn ear. 00:46 Mon Apr 30

Reuploaded -  -dies- Ew this image. Oh and I'll soon fix that black line from the tail to the haunch. x| 05:28, 30, 04, 2012

<3 Darken and blur the shading. 21:13, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :O How can you like it?! D'awww Thanks. I hate the shading on this. >:/ 07:16, 03, 05, 2012

How could you not like this? Blur the belly shading~ 09:55, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt a bit to match her other images. 20:41, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Changes probably aren't showing. :/ Thanks Dazzly and um... I think I blew the shading. o3o 11:25, 04, 05, 2012

Still a tad bit blotchy. Blur it, please.

Reuploaded -  Hope this is okay. My Guassian Blur must have crashed. >8C 06:58, 05, 05, 2012

Blur the belly shading. 21:47, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  -dies- Why did I leave the shading layer locked to transperent pixels? xD >>>.<<< Oh, hope this is better. 04:50, 06, 05, 2012

blur the tail shading ^^;  jack  never let go, loonie ❤  20:02, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (D) ~ Redone
Okay I know this was origanally supposed to be a tweak, but in chat Cloudy said that if it was impossible to tweak it could be a redo, not sure if this is what she meant but this is how I did it and if you want me to just tweak it then I will. But the shading needed to be fixed, the scars needed to be redone, and the earpink didn't match. The OA was... Scarletwind I think. 19:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a bit. 20:32, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 00:13, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

And define it. ^^ 01:07, 29, 04, 2012

Define the shading. 13:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/shoulder shading a bit more. 09:57, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:11, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink.... 22:09, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights." 00:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. 20:38, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and scars a tad 06:47, 05, 05, 2012

Reuploaded 21:18, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading~ 03:11, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Insaneular (I think), and it needed to match. Comments? 20:09, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken out some stripes. 04:54, 30, 04, 2012

I think it's my browser, but define the earpink some more. 21:47, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded yesterday I forgot to say it yesterday. And the earpink matches the warrior and apprentice, so I won't change it. 01:09, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to thicken out a few stripes to match. 06:33, 01, 05, 2012

Blur the ear pink a tiny bit and there's a bit of waste under him. 23:22, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:54, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his left ear 22:49, May 3, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the shading on the body s tad. Skt Like a baws  23:34, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:06, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

the stripes still look really thin compared to the warrior  jack  never let go, loonie ❤  18:43, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) - Redone
I personally like this version better. OA was me, at least the latest one was, and I didnt like the stripes, and it just overall looked bad...Comments?<333 01:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes just a bit. Nice job Twee~ 09:48, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit smaller. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Purty.~ 15:11, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving a bit of a warning, right now...I'm grounded until Wednesday Saturday, so I'll have it up then...just warning... {steps away} 23:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Eh... e3e 17:09, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit larger lol Skt Like a baws  08:35, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) ~ Tweaked
He needed a fluffy tail :3 Latest OA was Iceheart22. Changes probably aren't showing. I feel it needs to be floofier... 23:56, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it needs to be more floofier and possibly a tad spikier. 10:30, 02, 05, 2012

Also, make the lineart a bit thicker, if you can keep the floof<3 11:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh my word...I killed his tail ;.;  20:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

some of the floofy parts looks blockisk, make it...less blockish? i don't know how to phrase that owo -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  01:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Those are more likely the spiky parts x3. I'll fix that though. 10:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:03, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Separate the floofiness so it pokes out on the sides and add more spikey bits. :3 04:34, 06, 05, 2012

Reuploaded I tried to make one side spiky, and I left the other floofy. 12:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Longtail (E) - Redone
Misty's reservation expired. Copied the stripes from the old image exactly. Shading was blotchy. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire, and Sandstar. Colors are from the apprentice .xcf. Comments? 19:20, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

owo Define the shading a bit 20:50, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Blur the scar on the eye a bit. 20:37, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad? Breeze whisker  02:18, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. 05:40, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Redone
Not completely sure who the OA on this one was.... Wildfire I think. But it needed to match the apprentice, so here we go. Comments? 19:22, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Purdy, blur the earpink. 22:30, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on the tail -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  00:57, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) - Redone
There were shading issues. OA was Evanphoto, with a redo by Icey and a tweak by DJ. 20:48, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading a tad c: 21:49, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:51, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the neck shading a bit? 11:28, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:56, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

blur the highlight/lighter part on his shoulder. jack never let go, loonie ❤  18:42, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Timberfur (D) ~ Redone
Needed to match warrior. OA was... LeafstrikeAsakura. Comments? 21:06, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his flank. jack never let go, loonie ❤  18:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur (Ki) ~ Redone
OA is Sandstar12 with a redo by Spashpelt, and a tweak by Paleclaw. Redone to match the other images. You may have to go into the file history to see the changes. Comments? 22:10, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add shading to the tail? 22:42, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded But it's faint in a way because I tried to add a good amount of shading but it came out pretty weird..Anyway changes aren't showing. 01:10, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:13, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

This was supposed to be tweaked...It only needed to be lightened. 06:44, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Well....it was put in the redo pile, so I redid it. And Dazzle define the shading where? Or everywhere? 14:29, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Nope It was in the tweak pile... 16:29, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

DX Oh...my bad..DX Do I have to redo/tweak it again? 16:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I guess it's fine to keep it this way... =) Because if you had to do it over again, it would be extra work. Just make sure to check the pile more next time. :P Everybody makes mistakes, and I don't think people should punished for that. 20:46, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Just around the tail and legs~ ;3 22:49, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think the shading should be defined everywhere. It's kind of difficult to see. 23:44, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (Ki) ~ Redone
Feathertail <333 Redone to match the warrior and to have a floofly tail. Comments? 22:30 Sat May 5

Wasn't this supposed to be tweaked? o.o 02:18, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the list. I have no idea where it went but it's in the approved archives. I just checked. 02:32 Sun May 6

Ah. Odd things happen. xDDD Sorry for that. :P 02:35, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, if I see one more thing archived that's not on the list, or something that's forgotten to be archived, I'm gonna rage bigtime. >.> The tail's plumy, not fluffy, so make it a bit more round like the warrior. 06:20, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o.o 06:25 Sun May 6

That was my bad. It was on the list, and I accidentally remove it. No harm, no foul. Calm down.

Snake (Ro) - Redone
Needed to match his loner. OA was Mounty (?) 22:33, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 22:46, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

I disagree. In fact, I think the shading looks perfect (if I may say so myself). 02:19, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the white on the body and tail a tad. Skt Like a baws  07:21, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:59, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Logfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was Shruggy. Needed to be redone 'cause of shading issues. So, yeah. Me likie. <3

define the stripes on his midriff, they get lost in the shading. Jack never let go, loonie ❤  01:58, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I can't define them anymore than what they already are, honestly.

Re-uploaded. Layers are amazing.

Blur the pale markings a little. Breeze whisker  02:16, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Patchfoot (W) ~ Redone
I love black and white cats. <3 Redone to match his rogue charart. Breeze whisker  02:15, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black less gray and more black. o3o 05:10, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye values. 12:09, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit and blur it. 18:06, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just added the stripes. OA was Iceheart I think. I can't remember. Comments? 17:06 Sun May 6

blur the stipes a little bit to match the sharpclaw. -- jack  never let go, loonie ❤  18:40, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:47 Sun May 6

Tawnyspots (W) - Redone
needed to match elder. Original artist was Darkhallows. Comments? jack never let go, loonie ❤  22:20, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

He needs tufted ears. Please add that. 22:26, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Also, there appears to be a white pixel on the second fur spike (I hope you understand that). 22:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the shading on the paws. 22:54, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

The pixels look sort of uneven on the forehead. 23:12, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it match more by smudging the stripes more? 23:38, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightfall, with a redos by Mintstarr and DJ. (Lemme know if I missed anyone). I'm not changing any of the colors, as they come right from the xcf, which I got from Paleh.