Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Bluestar (Ki) ~ Redone
Sorry this is sloppy Dx OA was Quietstep with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart. Comments? 23:25, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, why do none of her images match her leader image? I just noticed they're all far too dark. 03:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  12:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 15:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be defined. 00:04, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

-Re-Uploaded.- 22:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

^^ Up there, with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart.. this is not twitter xD. Anyways add depth to the eyes, but if you don't want to you don't have to. 07:42, Tue, Jan, 31, 2012

XDDD Sorry. Re-Uploaded. 20:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The base pelt is still too dark, take the color from her haunch where I don't have it shaded  23:40, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, this is so cute! :D 01:09 Sat Feb 4

Re-Uploaded. 17:44, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) ~ Redone
OA was Mousetalon. He was a triangle tabby, and I got permission to redo him. Comments? 23:19, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Ears need to be tuffed. 23:25, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit. 02:20 Sun Jan 29

There is some white/pale gray pixels above the tail tip. 02:50, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Darken/define the shading. Breeze whisker  19:55, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purplely. -- Elo legs 20:54, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. 07:26 Wed Feb 1

Reuploaded. 17:44, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's still a pixel o' waste near the ear farthest away from us. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:11, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the legs. -- Elork   23:14, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, waste. >.> Reuploaded. -- 20:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) ~ Redone
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar. 05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D 19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should be shorter; it doesn't go all the way to his underarm. It's just on his flank. 20:50, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? 00:41, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Possibly thicken the stripes a bit? 01:14 Sat Feb 4

Make the earpink a bit bigger too. 01:18 Sat Feb 4

Make the scar a bit thicker. 03:55, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, i think the ear-pink is fine and for the stripes, they are the same thickness as the other ones. Other then that, comments? 18:27, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please make the earpink a bit bigger and define it? Also move it into the ear more. 19:13 Sun Feb 5

Blur the shading too. 23:34 Sun Feb 5

The stripes may be the same thickness as his kit charart, but this isn't a kit. As he grew, his stripes naturally grew as well to be proportional to his body size. On that note, the apprentice charart should be tweaked as well. 04:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Honeyfur, and he was a triangle tabby. Comments? 18:05, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is so cute! :D 18:15 Tue Jan 31

Reuploaded 18:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 19:17, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:42, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. 21:54, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:33, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur where the earpink is smudged into the pelt more(or you can smudge it in more) 00:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:37, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) ~ Tweaked
She needed her shading blurred/redone, and the OA looks like Sandstar12, with a tweak by Flamingomom. I also tweaked the earpink, because I believe hot-pink isn't exactly the right shade. xD Comments? 01:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I have to go make the background transparent... I'll reupload in a sec. 01:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and blur it. 01:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stupid earpink... x.x 01:29, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. ^^ Just lighten her a bit, as this is a bit too dark to be dark gray. 07:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gracias. o3o 03:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

She still looks a little dark. I think her images should be tweaked to make the color more like Yellowfang ^^ 01:09, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular please. :D 01:16 Sat Feb 4

Don't change her color. If you remove the shading from Yellowfang she honestly seems like a neutral gray. 14:49, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the color a little bit, but not to the same shade of Yellowfang. 15:12, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Whoops. Uploaded the wrong version. XD 15:15, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better. 15:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it more. 19:07 Sun Feb 5

Wing (PH) ~ Tweaked
Let's try this again, shall we? 19:42, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and just so I don't get into trouble... OA is moi. =D 19:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink. ;D Sky Dovahjerk 06:33, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is there any way you can change the pattern? I know this caused drama last time but it still looks like really awkward shading that needs blurring. 20:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm with Oblivion on this one. 04:43 Fri Feb 3

I think the pattern looks fine; it's perfectly natural and the shading on the white looks different from the patches. C:  Elork   19:13, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

(Message from Cloudy) She says that she'll play around with the mud and upload it later, she doesn't have internet access yet. 03:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern is staying, whether you like it or not. I'm sorry, but I'm not changing the entire image just because you guys are picky. So, I played around with it. Comments? 19:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste around the tail and head, if you didn't already see. And I think the pattern looks fine the way it is, if it's alright for me to voice my opinion. 20:40, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Thanks, Shadeh. Re-uploaded. 20:47, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ Tweaked
Angry pregnant Yellowfang judges you. Anyway, made the muzzle match the fabulous apprentice image. Comments? 04:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is a bit of extra lineart sticking out on the left side (our left) of her chin. This is pretty epic Shellyward XP 04:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail? I don't want to get judged 3: Especially by an angry pregnant Yellowfang... 23:59, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang! Darken the shading on the farthest(?) leg and the bottom of the chest. 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is a tweak, not a redo. I only did this for the muzzle, guys. 16:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

They're not telling you to redo this... 18:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

And this will only be tweaked later for the shading if you don't tweak i now. why not tweak it while it's up? Yes, you may have just done it for the muzzle, but that doesn't mean other things couldn't be changed. And thin out the line for the muzzle a bit. It's a lot thinner on her other images and look kinda out of place here being so thick. 20:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Ki) - Redone
Even for a Dark Forest cat, she's pretty cute. OA was Sandy, I think, with a redo by Darkhallows. Needed to match other images. Comments? 05:31, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the patches to match the warrior. Cute <3  Elork   23:36, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:32, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger. 17:46, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:54, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger. ;3 <span style="">19:04 Sun Feb 5

Brackenheart (MC) ~ Redone
Redone because it was a triangle tabby. OA was XxdovesongXX. Eh, I liked the loner better. Comments? 05:53, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like a mottled or heavily spotted tabby. So I suggest making the stripes larger and thicker. But looks good! 05:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thickened the major stripes. I think I fixed it. Thank you Stoney <3 06:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin and define the unshaded part on his tail. -Bloo not logged on

Re-uploaded  23:23, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes bigger to match the loner's charart. 14:50, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  17:42, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. <span style="">19:00 Sun Feb 5

Darken the shading on the back. -- 20:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:59, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Shadepelt (W) ~ Tweaked
I really love tweaking shading. And I have Shadepelt yet again. XD OA was Mousetalon. I'm worried I made her too dark. Breeze whisker  06:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Waste in between the legs. ;3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 10:47, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks very blotchy, try to blur it a lot. If that doesn't work, you probably have to redo the shading. 14:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bit bigger. 14:34, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading alittle bit under the chin. -Bloo no logged

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  20:25, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur shadings some more. <span style="">00:55, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Make the earpink bigger. <span style="">01:06 Sat Feb 4

There's some waste between the legs. 20:56, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Breeze  whisker  18:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <span style="">06:36, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Go nuts on blurring the shading. o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  07:23, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (E) - Redone
Aha! A spot >:D I really like this one <3. Original Artist was Sandy, shading was blotchy, and because the warrior image is all greem and blotchey, Ivy gave me permision to redo them on chat C: Comments? Elork  20:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. This is gorgeous Elo.(: Breeze  whisker  20:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Risa! Define the earpink and make it fill the ear more. 20:33, February 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

reuploaded C:  Better? -- Elork   20:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you move the bottom of the earpink up a little bit. It kinda looks too far down. I <3 this 23:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded~ Better? ''' -- Elork   16:59, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading a tad. This is better than the orginal one you did <3. 23:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mumble785, tweaks by Bramble and Rainwhisper. Comments? 20:33, February 3, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Is this the one where the tortie patches needed to be smudged more? If yes, then smudge some more. <span style="">00:08, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Re-Uploaded - Better? 19:33, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Cloudtail (KP) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow, and he needed his collar removed. No reference ftw. 21:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and foreleg C:  Elork   23:05, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the eyes 8D 23:07, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and define the tail shading too. 23:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I made it worse ._. 02:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

It looks fine, Oblivion. Just blur the shading on the haunch and shoulder a wittle more. :3 15:40, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:42, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Towards the bottom of the ear it is lighter than the rest. Blur that part or fix it. <span style="">08:41, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

Blur the tail shading and lighten it more. <span style="">18:57 Sun Feb 5

Re-uploaded. Also, DJ, what are you talking about? Both ears are the same colour all the way through. 23:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I ment earpink. >.< <span style="">06:40, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Swallowtail (RC) - Redone
Another spot >:D. Same with the elder; Original Artist was Darkhallows. I :D. Comments? Elork  23:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely Elo ^^ Blur the earpink and define the shading on the tail. 23:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Why did it have to be redone? Wow........ ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Nevermind, just saw the elder.... ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:08, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. <span style="">00:36 Sat Feb 4

Reuploaded C:  -- Elork   17:00, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading 20:51, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt. W) ~ Redone
It was a triangle tabby. I got perrmission and the OA was Ivyheart and was redone by Icestorm. Comments? 06:37, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink. C: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 02:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  02:40, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Like I said on chat, I seriously cried of it's beauty. Redden or tone down the earpink just a tad? <3 05:14, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much Twi <333 Let's hope the changes show. 05:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (PH) - Redone
So I don't know if I'm allowed to post this yet since her loner isn't approved, but she was just sitting in my reservations and I've just been dying to do her. OA was Honeyfur, with redos by a whole lot of people. 04:21, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful ^^ Can you define her stripes a little? 04:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Aw man... I was gonna try to post her kit-mother before you. XD Anyway, define the earpink a little. 19:44, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

And the mud. :P 20:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oh, you guys and your defining :3 23:04, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (CG) - Tweaked
Added mud and darken the shading a tad. Would anyone really have a hissy fit if I redid him? His stripes don't really match his other images. OA was Hiddensun 06:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the patches a little. 23:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (Q) - Tweaked
Tweaked the blind eye to make it white like the other images. This might be declined, as I believe Sweet tried to tweak this before but it was reverted. Nether the less, it was on the tweaking page under chararts needing tweaking. OA= Nightfall, adding transperancy by Bramble and Shimmerpool, with a tweak by Mintstarr and Sweet (?). Meh. Comments. <span style="">09:01, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

If I remember correctly, Sweet withdrew it, so, that's maybe why. Anyway, I know it wasn't on the list for this, but, the earpink looks neon (though, it may be my computer). Could you tone it down a little? 15:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ah, yes, Mintstar was one of the few males on this wiki. Blur the haunch and tail shading a bit. 17:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I withdrew because of some stupid "ring" of pixels. :P Lighten the shading, it makes her look gray. <span style="">17:59 Sun Feb 5

One-eye is grey. XD Make the earpink the same as the elder. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  07:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (W) - Redone
Finally a space! Needed to match Leader image. OA was Elorisa. Comments? :) 09:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is way better than mine was <3. Define the earpink a tad C:  Elork   14:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the break more dramatic looking, like it is on his apprentice charart. It is described as looking like a broken twig, after all, and here it just looks like he's rather pleased with something (must have killed another apprentice). 04:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I had some trouble with the tail, any chance of a redline? Every way I did it it just looked curled... 06:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Duskfur (W) ~ Redone
Sky, don't say mine is better, because it isn't. OA was Sandstar12 Comments? 13:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You shoulda known that comment would attract me like a moth to a flame, even if I didn't see it yet. :P Make the pale bits paler, and thicken up the stripes a bit. And maybe enlarge the earpink a tad while you're at it. P.S, this is better...>8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk   13:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (L) ~ Tweaked
The OA was some user named *Wildfire* :P shading needed to be tweaked. 16:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh yeah, whoever is that user. XP Naw. This looks nice. Could you perhaps darken the shading a tad? But, if it's fine, that's alright. ;) 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Stonepelt (E) - Tweaked
OA = Quietstep and a tweak or two from Moonflight The scar needed to be defined and less round. Comments? <span style="">18:55 Sun Feb 5

Fuzz (KP) - Tweaked
Honestly, that eyes are horrible. Anyway, i made bell on the collar (next horrible one) and fluffy tail to match description, i can try add the "long feathery fur" if someone will want it. OA is Evanphoto, redone by Atelda. He looks funny xD ,19:19,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - edited eyes ,19:29,February 5,2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes only need to be edited if it's a very prominent trait, like on Owleyes/star whatever his name was, he was named after it, so it was prominent. But otherwise, they should stay the same. :P And I can't find the changes. DX 06:15, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 07:17, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

changes arent showing ,16:40,February 6,2012 (UTC)

Lilyfur (Q) - Tweaked
This is bad! Original artist (am I the only one who still says "Original artist"?) was Echomist, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 20:09, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded without anyone telling me to I redid the shading again. 20:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Bkur the shading a bit more. 20:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple. 20:33, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Runningwind (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandy with a very slight tweak by Icey. I had permission to redo this, as the shading needed to be darkened, wrong shading placement, and the colors were wrong, along with some blurred lineart. I was told to keep the same style. Comments? 20:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is really good. Blur/smudge the stripes on the chest area a tad bit. 166.249.107.125 20:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

^that was me^. Forgot to sign in. 20:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Like this? ^^ Hope changes are showing... 20:23, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make him less greenish and more brown. 23:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. :D <span style="">23:33 Sun Feb 5

Could you tweak the stripe on his face? It looks more like a tattoo (you know, one of those tattoos from Yu-Gi-Oh that all the badies seem to have) than a stripe. 04:14, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I want only ask.. because this is beatiful, are we going to redone his apprentice charart too? (oh bad question) and may I do it, since Im OA? 17:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, go for it. 17:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)