Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 17

Jag (CG) - Redone
Yay a cave-guard! OA was Grayravenpaw. The mud needed to be smudged, there was blurred lineart in many places, the shading needed fixed, and I also noticed that his description says that he is dark gray, which before, he was not. I hope it's ok that I did a new color for it (if need be I can tweak the loner too, or if it's not ok I'll put it back to it's original color). The dark gray color is like Crowfeather's. Comments for improvement? 21:26, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

OH, I almost forgot, it was indeed listed to be redone. Sorry! 23:25, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/ smudge the mud into the pelt more, and make the earpink smaller - 03:58, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and lighten the mottles on the mud. This is great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:52, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? 00:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. This is lovely. 02:36 Thu Nov 3

Blur the earpink and the mud a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:14, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:07, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

24 Hours - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:10, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Nightstar (L) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be thickened and blurred, and I made the eyes amber instead of brown, though that wasn't listed, since it wasn't natural. Hard to tell who the OA was, but I THINK it was Mumble785. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:55, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and changes aren't showing yet. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:56, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading alot more; he was described glossy, yes? Guradian 03:59, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading's dark enough, but yes he was described as glossy. Should I add a layer of highlights over this then? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:48, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added a layer of highlights over it to make him look glossy. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

24 Hours. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:10, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (L) - Tweaked.
Tearing of the ear. Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall ftw! 02:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

OA? And if you only tore the ear, then why is this redone? Perhaps thicken the lineart to match with the surrounding lineart. 02:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. OOPS. Sorry. I meant tweaked. XD OA is either Mistystar139, Iceheart, or Sandwich989. Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall ftw! 03:01, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is only meant to be tweaked to tear the ear...but can you please blur the shading? It's bothering me.... 04:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried...Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall ftw! 20:03, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the torn lineart on --> side towards the tip. 20:04, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall ftw! 20:08, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job. :3 OA was Sandwich989; Iceheart made the earpink fill the ear, and I redid it later. xD Can you make the right tip of the torn ear more triangular? It looks a bit round. 22:25, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded...thanks for clearing that up. x3 Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall  ftw! 22:38, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's one random pixel on his back closest to his belly that's not the same as all the other pixels. Fix that and darken the earpink a tad. Looks good. 00:23 Fri Nov 4

Re-uploaded. Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall  ftw! 01:19, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Improvements made - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:10, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (K) ~ Redone
OA was Nightfall101, and I redid it to match her warrior version. Wildheart said I could do this, so it doesn't violate the rules. And, I'm not changing any colors (including earpink) since I got the colors off of her warrior charart. Comments? 22:03, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think the cream parts look a bit yellower on her warrior image. 21:09, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:10, November 4, 2011 (UTC)