Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 220

Tabby Warrior 1 (W) ~ Approved
I hate doing the headings for these... 01:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

This may be hard, but define the tail shading a tad? It blends in with the brown. 01:44, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

could you dull that white down so that it looks like a pale part? also could you taper the stripes some?

smudge the stripes into a bit more of a taper at the ends, they're a little too paint-brushy 05:59, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

With all due respect, why can't I leave it white? I based this off my own kitty. Unless there's some rule with minor characters I missed...? 11:36, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Unless the character is described as tabby and white explicitly, adding white would be an assumption.

Reuploaded Uh... I tried. Also, RIP, sorry Misty that I couldn't make you a charart... If anyone finds a Leafpool-like cat with art to be done lmk? 23:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

There is quite a bit of waste outside the tail, and one small speck outside the chin/neck. 23:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

if there is supposed to be shading, could u define shading on the tail i can barely see it -- 13:58, 4/07/2019

Expand the shading on the < side of the lower back to curve down and meet with the pale bit down there - and remove the shading on the > side of the haunch, as the light source doesn't call for it.

Reuploaded If this isn't better then I need help. I also may have inadvertently lightened the overall shading more than I meant to... 01:47, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Hm yeah it is better but I'd re-darken that to a little past what it had been before.

Reuploaded Watch this introduce a whole slew of new problems w/ my luck... 03:13, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:41, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

WindClan gray tom ~ Approved
I didnt know whether willow was doing the unknown affiliations one or the windclan one so I just did this one? also am not too sure about the darkness :/ couldn't see it too well on my screen but will probably lighten it for the next reup

There's a glob of waste below where the tail curves. Tinystream (talk) 03:09, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

reups also lightened it (considerably) and played around with the shading

reups tweaked the shading since i wasn't too happy with it

This is really good! I'm gonna bump ya up to an apprentice since you seem to know what you're doing. And perhaps define the shading depth? 12:16, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the chest shading a little and add some on the nose^^

reups

can you define the shading depth jsut a litte? 13:58, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

reups

CBA? 12:45, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:01, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Sunbeam (W) ~ Approved
i realize the shading is all kinds of wack will fix that tomorrow.  Ellie  life is an illusion 07:40, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I don't know if straight uppurple eyes should be used. purple tinted blue sure, but purple eyes is pushing even the "realism isn't such a thing in warriors" and it's only ever been a mistake. 07:58, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I meam, warriors doesn't even really go off of realism so.. and i had the kit have purple eyes and nobody said anything.  Ellie  life is an illusion 17:01, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

That was due to the smaller scale, and I was going to comment on that one. Most things in this world do not have purple eyes, I think you should change it to be a bit more blue-ish Malina457 (talk) 17:28, April 11, 2019 (UTC)malina

Could you smudge the white just ever so slightly, more so on the chest? It just looks a little hard-edged compared to the other white markings. 20:53 Thu Apr 11 2019

Agreed on the eyes; Also, could you define the facial shading? I can't see any at all. ​​​

Re-Ups  Ellie  life is an illusion 23:40, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes are still purple. Disregard my comment if this has been fixed, but I agree with the eye statement. Please make them more blue 14:35, 4/12/2019

I did make them more blue, wikia seems to have glitched on showing it...  Ellie  life is an illusion 16:47, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

I'll play with the eyes tomorrow and see if I can fix it.  Ellie  life is an illusion 01:36, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups just changed eye color  Ellie  life is an illusion 22:12, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:46, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:01, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Softpelt (W) ~ Approved


i don't think there'd be much light on the back leg

the back leg furthest from us isnt filed in -- 08:46, 4/12/2019

Reuploaded Yeah rip didn't have it filled in at all... forgot it was supposed to be.

Tbh if the light is coming from above (which it seems to be) there wouldn't be any light on that back leg.

The source is coming from > way, not the top (as I currently have shading on the forehead and such)

Reuploaded that's the limit to how much light I'd like to remove, if at all possible.

CBA? 12:46, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:01, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Cloud With Storm in Belly (E) - Approved
my shading tint is red 05:15, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the front leg closest to us?  Ellie  life is an illusion 06:19, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:57, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth out the shading on the haunch?

Reuploaded. 16:51, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:47, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:01, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Eaglewing (W) ~ Approved
Can someone rename the image for me? I added the extra to distinguish her from on of the OC's I created an image for who has the same name, and forgot to change it before I uploaded this. All colors from kit/apprentice images. Comments? 19:10, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Renamed it for you ^^ 21:46, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

maybe smudge the stripes a teeny bit, or perhaps blur them on the tail? they look more hard-edged than the apprentice 01:48 Sat Apr 13 2019

Reuploaded. Can't smudge the stripes, as they aren't smudged on the apprentice. 19:22, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for the wait! CBA? 12:48, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:01, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Nightfur (E) ~ Approved
Comments? 23:23, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe smooth out the shading? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  23:44, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:55, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for the wait!! CBA? 12:49, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:01, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Flamekit (TC) (K) - Approved
"whats a good name for a black kit?" 23:32 Fri Apr 12 2019

I think this is purrfect! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:33, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

I thinm you've been told this before but we aren't suppose to comment if it isn't helpful to fixing the image.  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:20, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Whoops. Srry! Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:12, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading on the haunch? and yes obviously this is artists choice, but have you considered making his eyes flame colored to match his name? just a suggestion 03:27, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded that was such a dope suggestion - cheers burnt! (i was just shocked by his description and name lol) 23:33 Sat Apr 13 2019

CBA? Very cute! 12:49, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:01, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Sun Shadow (Star) ~ Approved
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CBA? 12:53, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe make the eyeshine brighter? Malina457 (talk) 18:02, April 15, 2019 (UTC)malina

The eyes are perfectly fine, as the style Star did is completely her choice. The colors aren't the brightest on his images. the CBA will continue from when Vec called it. ​

Approved! 13:01, April 16, 2019 (UTC)