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Medicine Cat Apprentice Blanks - For Approval

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 * Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 00:26, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

This seems fine. But don't color the herbs (?). -- Darkhallows Lair 02:30, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I think it would be a good idea to color the herbs. Unless we don't mind the herbs in all the medicine cats' mouths to possibly different colors. -- Goldencloud 03:41, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think we should colour the herbs in the blanks. The outline of the herbs should be a bit thicker, and should extend a bit further up as if they were in the mouth, not under the chine! A bit of chin has to be consealed by the hearbs to do this. Just put it were you think that the mouth should be, only a few pixels higher. -- Dawnfeather 06:21, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

No, don't colour the herbs; there are so mnay different types of leaves they could be carrying that we may as well leave it up to whoever colours the cat to decide what colour green they should be - it will add to the individuality of each pixel. Sandy Talk! 11:17, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

This blank can't be accepted, because you edited the apprentice blanks to make these. I'l either decline this, or you can start over from scratch. G B 57 22:47, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

GB, we have permission to edit the blanks, and on the forum, 'Do we really need Medicine Cat Apprentice Blanks' we have basically decidec to edit the blanks to put herbs into their mouths and make them Med cats. That's what i did below. -- Dawnfeather 22:59, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

No, we don't. Please see "A Little Misunderstanding...". G B 57 23:15, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

??? What did I miss? Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 23:29, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

K, looks like we can use these after all. G B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 02:13, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

So, Misty, I think if you just thicken the leaves' outline and take out the color, it would look pretty good. -- Bramble My Realm 15:37, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

OK, but It will take awhile, I'm not using the same computer. I think GB knows I have more than one. ;) <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 23:51, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

This? Oh, the last one didn't upload. -.- <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 02:01, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Take out the color, and make them a little less round, more like your original leaves. But I like the thickened lineart. -- Bramble My Realm 03:11, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Opps! I 4got 'bout the color, and I can't make them the way the first one is like. I 4got. -.- <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 22:21, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Just take the colour out and make the leaves more pointed; they don't have to be identical to your first ones just less rounded. Also, you nede to do the other blank so that it is the same as the three. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 13:33, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

ie. you need to do the longhaired tom Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 13:34, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Ugg. The tom got deleted. -_- But will do Sandy! <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 21:36, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

These haven't been worked on in a week. Please work on them now or they will be declined.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 06:25, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

OMG, I forgot! I'll have them in by tomorrow! <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 12:30, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Can you guys not decilne it yet? I don't get a lot of computer time anymore... <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 21:47, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

It's okay by me but you do need to work on them ASAP Mistyfur. If they do get declined then just resubmit them when you've made the improvements. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 11:50, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

OK. And I might not be on here a lot cuz of GB. And it's a good reason! =] <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 12:53, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

It's been said numerous times, please stop making rude comments about GB.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 20:51, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Seriously. It has been 13 days since the last constructive edit to these images. Please edit by tomorrow else they'll be declined in 24 hours. Sorry Mistyfur but we can't just leave them here for an unlimited amount of time as that's unfair to other users who have their images declined after a week of no improvement. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 16:07, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Bumblekit for Approval
I'm finally back! Well I see Bumblekit was taken down like I expected. So here we have Bumblekit up again. No highlights this round (i despise them on kits)just different sets of shading. I looked at some of the other kits for reference.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 22:29, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Welcome back, Bumblekit! I'd say he looks pretty good, but your shading confuses me. Where is the light source coming from? --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;cyan; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> Goldencloud 23:09, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

The shading style looks fine to me as it's what is used on a lot of approved kits. I just think it needs to be darker and slightly bigger on the forelegs. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 10:17, 11 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Well here we are. Finally got me some more free time. I made the shading darker and long on the legs.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 01:54, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Now you need to blend it into the pelt a lot more to get a natural transition and perhaps make it smaller on the neck Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 08:20, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Updated-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 23:50, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm, he sort of looks like he's wearing a hood with earholes because the shading's a bit large. :) Maybe decrease the shading a little around his head, and on his right side the shading under his chin looks a bit large. Also shade his ears a little. He looks cute otherwise. -- Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

The shading on (our) right side seems short. Bring it out so it fill that entire area behind the leg. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 09:45, 18 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Updated-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 00:01, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

The new line of shading is really stong. Soften it out a lot. -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 06:28, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

There is a line outside of the line art.Minnowclaw 02:45, 25 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Cinderpelt (medicine cat-for approval

 * [[File:Cinderpelt (medicine cat).PNG]]


 * If there is anything wrong, please tell me. I want this picture to be perfect. My first medicine cat with the new blanks. In my opinion, Cinderpelt wouldn't look all that great if she was in a thin, slender looking medicine cat blank. The warrior blank suits her because she was supposed to be one... --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color;Navy; background:Silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:1em; color:Navy;">Mallinois Herding Talk 11:28, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

She's too dark, as she is only specified as a gray she cat with blue eyes, and fluffy i think too. She is also a tabby. I agree that she has to be perfect, as I am also a great fan of her! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 13:01, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


 * In the allegiances, it says: Cinderpelt-dark gray she-cat. So she is dark gray, and she's not a tabby, but many times in the books, she has been mentioned with enormous blue-colored eyes. Anything else? (And can someone cite tabby markings if she has any?) Plus, she's long-haired, so that takes care of the fluffy. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color;Navy; background:Silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:1em; color:Navy;">Mallinois Herding Talk 13:10, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

On her actual page, it says that she is a gray tabby. I still don't think she should be so dark though. The ear colour is too bright. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 13:14, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

I think she should be a bit lighter and should have tabby stripes as she is supposed to look like Cinderheart who is the reincarnation of her and is a tabby. As for the rest; more blending of the shading to make the colour transitions smoother. Also make the ear pink smaller  Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 16:57, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


 * In most of the allegiances she has been in, she's dark gray. If she has tabby markings, someone please provide a direct citation from the books, page number and volume. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color;Navy; background:Silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:1em; color:Navy;">Mallinois Herding Talk

Wasn't she identical to Cinderheart?--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 00:20, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Apologies Mal; I looked for a few references last night and the only descriptions of her within the books were of a grey she-cat. She is said to ahve 'smoky grey fur' on page 65 of the paperback edition of Forest of Secrets. You need to make her a little lighter as she looks almost black here and the shading needs blending. No tabby stripes; that should be removed from her page Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 12:01, 13 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Oh, it's fine. I lightend her and changed the ear pink. It may take a while to show up, though. I tried to keep her dark, but not too dark like my last one. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color;Navy; background:Silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:1em; color:Navy;">Mallinois Herding Talk 14:28, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Her colour is better but the ear pink needs to be smaller still as it is kind of almost coming out of her ear at the moment. Also, the shading needs to be blended more still. Try just pulling it towards the middle of the image a bit more with the blur tool. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 14:43, 13 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Done, but It may be a while before it shows. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color;Navy; background:Silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:1em; color:Navy;">Mallinois Herding Talk 15:08, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

She looks pretty good! I like how you did her twisted leg! If you read what my comment originally said, don't worry about lightening her any more. Things at the top of my screen are darker than when they're on the bottom. She looks fine at the bottom of the screen. :) Okay, I'm done rambling. --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;cyan; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> Goldencloud 23:26, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

I think that she still needs to be lighter, but it may just be that it's not showing up yet. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 23:43, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Yeah I think this looks great, but it might hep to make it a little lighter. Cause on my computer it looks like almost black.<font color="Yellow" style="background:Orange">Sandwich <font color="Blue" style="background:Green">989 18:31, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


 * If you see her as dark, try standing up if you can't see some stuff. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color;Silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:Silver;">Mallinois <font color="Lime" style="background:Navy">Timberwolves 22:44, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

To me her colour looks fine (but I've learned not to trust my computer...). She needs a bit more shading on her near foreleg and neck though Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 06:37, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Agreed on points above, and also decrease her ear pink a little bit, as it's overlapping the ear a little. -- Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Anything else? (Can't work on it right now, but I'll get to it tommorrow or the next day....) --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 21:47, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I've always imagined one of her back legs as being twisted, and her leg looks wierd at a perfect right angle... Other than that, great image! -- MU MB LE 785  00:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

No, I think it was always her front paw. I looks twisted enough to me. However, I agree with Bramble. -<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:22, 23 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Changed ear pink, though it may be a while to show. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 12:34, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Much better. Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 01:59, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Patchfoot - Withdrawn


I wish Patchfoot would've had a bigger role in Firestar's Quest, I think I could've grown to like him. I hope I did the patches okay, I didn't use a reference on him. I should try something other than warriors...I will after I get Brindleface posted. --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;cyan; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> Goldencloud 23:44, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
 * EDIT1 Un-squared patch on upper foreleg. haha now it looks like Scooby-Doo's leg. And blurred head patch. --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;cyan; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> Goldencloud 17:14, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 * EDIT2 Blurred Scooby-Doo patch. <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;cyan; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> Goldencloud 00:14, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * EDIT3 I smoothed out the black on the head, but it's not showing up. :( Let me play with it a bit... <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud  22:17, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is really good! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 23:46, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

♠ Dawnfeather :D Thank you! I don't see what's so great about it, but if you see something I guess I'm glad! --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;cyan; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> Goldencloud 04:33, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


 * One of the patches is sort of... square. -- Darkhallows Lair 04:44, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

This is really good. The patch on the head needs neatening up a bit though as the edges are really smudgy. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 13:38, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

♠ Darkhallows Acknowledged. ♠ Sandy Thanks! I smudged the patches then went over them with the blur tool, I must have missed the head. --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;cyan; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> Goldencloud 17:14, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Mrrow? Anything else I need to work on? <span style="font-family:Slayer; color;cyan; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;"> Goldencloud 01:30, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - That black patch on his shoulder....it looks less blurred than the other patches. Try blurring it just a teensy bit more. But this looks aweome! Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 19:33, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

♠ Mosswisker I blurred the patch! Thanks for pointing that out. I guess when I rounded it out I forgot to re-blur it. :D <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 02:01, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Hello? Anyone there? Does this need more help? <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 23:07, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Extend the black patch on the head a little along the muzzle so it looks less squared. That's about it. Great job! -- Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

► Bramble I'm surprised this hasn't been taken down from lack of work! Will do, Bramble! <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 21:59, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I normally give about a week before it's taken down. No need to worry. :) -- Bramble My Realm 22:07, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

teh shoulder and back patches aern't blurred as much as the rest. -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 10:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

'''I am going to withdraw both my Patchfoot and Brindleface images. My computer is loaded with viruses, and I can't do anything without 7 different fake spyware alerts popping up in my face. Once I get a new computer, I'll continue working on them. I'd like to keep these two on reserve, because obviously I have done them. Sorry about this!''' --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 17:21, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Mousefur-for approval
I have NO clue how or why this was deleted. My internet was down and I couldn't get on to fix it. Can I please keep working on it?! Minnowclaw 23:53, 15 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It was probably deleted because it hadn't been worked on in a certain amount of time. :) I think she looks good, except she needs more shading. <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 00:25, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Can I still work on it? If so, where should I put more shading?Minnowclaw 02:43, 16 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Of course you can still work on her - she was taken down due to lack of work but nobody knew it was because you couldn't get onto the computer. If that ever happens feel free to resubmit as you have done here. As for the image itself: More shading could be put on the head and it all needs to be a bit bigger if you ask me. Blend all your shading and perhaps change the ear colour as it's kind of purplish. You could also try a highlight on the back to add dimension by using the lighten tool. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 08:31, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Which one do you think is better? Minnowclaw 22:12, 16 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw


 * The first one looks better because the second one with the highlight doesn't match the fur color at all. If that's a highlight anyway. It looks sort of brownish-pinkish.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 23:54, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

K anything else?Minnowclaw 23:56, 16 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

She's better, but the ear pink is too light and it stands out. I suggest using this color or something near: Also add shading on the foreleg and hind leg curve. She's very good otherwise. -- Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Does that pink look better? Minnowclaw 21:16, 17 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

PLEASE, give me all the notes on it you can. I know it's not perfect!Minnowclaw 14:28, 19 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The ear is better but some of the shading is rather smudgy. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 14:48, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

What parts are sumdgy?Minnowclaw 16:19, 19 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The tail and back. It's not so much smudgy as... unsmooth... if that makes sense Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 16:21, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I don't know what you mean.Minnowclaw 22:35, 20 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Just blur the tail and back some, and they will look smoother. -- Bramble My Realm 22:06, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think it looks different, but I did that.Minnowclaw 22:32, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

That looks better, but your ear went back to that bright shade of pink. Change it back. -- Bramble My Realm 23:47, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I couldn't find the other one, better? Minnowclaw 00:26, 22 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Oh please comment! This needs to be done before I go to camp!Minnowclaw 15:58, 22 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I don't know, I think it looks fine, except for maybe some shading on the near foreleg. Other than that, you've done a great job on Mousefur. -- Bramble My Realm 16:34, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Fixed that, and thanks Bramble!Minnowclaw 14:08, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Extend it some more out along the tail, so shading is along the whole foreleg and not just on the corner. And you're welcome. -- Bramble My Realm 01:58, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Is this better?Minnowclaw 02:34, 25 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Kestrelwing - for approval
[[File:Kestrelwing for approval(2).pngWhat do you think of him? Did I spell his name correctly?Minnowclaw 01:47, 18 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I actually really like this effect. My only suggestion would be to put in a pupil into the eye! :D --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 06:09, 18 June 2009 (UTC)


 * The tabby markings need to be wavy like Echosong's, smooth y's like Leafpool, or jagged y's like Brownpaw's. Triangle tabby is, mentioned by Kitsufox, cartoony, and I use Kitsu's judgement on tabby. --

I darkened the pelt a bit and tried new markings.Minnowclaw 14:15, 18 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I like his colour and these markings are along the right lines but they are very squiggly; perhaps straighten them a little and make sure they are everywhere. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:13, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Sorry about not putting a new one up soon. I couldn't get it just right, but now I'm happy with the work.Minnowclaw 14:27, 19 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Ooops! I forgot the ear, L.O.L!Minnowclaw 14:52, 19 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It looks like he has a miniature sun on his flank... Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 16:20, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

The markings look a bit...fat. Try blending them more.--<font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior♥ <font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior's Palace 18:38, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Good?Minnowclaw 23:01, 20 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I like it but put a pupil in the eye. Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  19:56, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 21:30, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It still doesn't look like it has one. The way I do it is one make a backwards looking utah where the color is now and do a white pixel in the corner of the color. I'm sorry if its wrong Im forgettful right now. Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  01:20, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I got a little bit confused, what about this?Minnowclaw 01:32, 22 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

lol The markings are very... spindly now, perhaps increase the width by a pixel or two. Also, the ear pink is too bright and needs blending. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 14:13, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I made it one pixel bigger and I think it looks, odd. Which one is better?Minnowclaw 15:36, 22 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I like your new version, but your eye needs to be done like on your first image. Also, the tail looks... flat. Add maybe a highlight and/or shading to it. -- Bramble My Realm 23:29, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Is that good?Minnowclaw 00:52, 24 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I like it but the ear pink is still really... obvious. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 11:01, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Is this a better color?Minnowclaw 19:35, 24 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Runningwind- For Approval
I'm not sure about the stripes, I am so sick of doing the other ones though... --<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 09:18, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't know about the stripes either. I think that the idea could work though. Try and use this effect to do cats that have marbled tabby markings. It could work. Fiddle around a bit more. Maybe make them curved and wavy randomly, so with and some without forks. Could work... --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 09:49, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Triangle tabby shouldn't be accepted like this. Use your regular tabby markings, DH. Plus, If you want color info, Runningwind is a brown tabby, look in Rising Storm when he dies. --

I love these kind of markings, personally. Real cats have the markings, I think, from some cat pics I've looked through. Anyway, maybe darken him because he looks more golden than brown.--<font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior♥ <font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior's Palace 17:42, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

He definitely needs to be more brown and less yellow in my opinion. Also, there is a dark stripe down his back not disimilar to Greystripe's...I don't remember him having this Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:08, 18 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Actually, the smooth y's are the most accurate, like the one's on Leafpool. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 22:32, 18 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Depends on the cat, actually. Does he look better now?--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 07:47, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

I reckon he could be a bit browner. I i like the stripes. :D --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 08:41, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


 * He's supposed to be light brown. I don't wanna make him too dark...--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 08:51, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

I like the colour better now but the ear pink needs a bit more blending. Also, the markings on the top of his head look a little strange... Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 09:27, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Alright, I changed it.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 20:18, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Extend the ear pink a little bit.--<font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior♥ <font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior's Palace 21:16, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Alright, done.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 07:02, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Could you add some tabby marks coming out from his chest? That part of his body looks bare. Also add some more around the facial area. -- Bramble My Realm 23:30, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I don;t think they look right, but I tried.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 06:56, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Little Mew - For Approval


My first kit. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 09:58, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

I like it. But make the hay colored fur part more like it is in the Graystripe manga one. Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  19:02, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Nice. <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 20:24, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

I haven't read the Graystripe manga series since it first came out, so i have no idea what you mean... --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 08:41, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


 * In the comic he has yellow 'hair'--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 09:22, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Can someone show me a pic from the book? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 10:02, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

I got creative. Is this what you mean? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 06:51, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

I can't really say, but you will have to change the line art. It's like a little...., fluff. Like, sort of a fluffy Mohawk that moves over to one side. Am I making any sense?!Minnowclaw 22:34, 20 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Sorry, I just looked and it's like hair, or a flatten out Mohawk on both sides, my bad!Minnowclaw 01:37, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I don't know about this one. It looks weird... --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 02:56, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

This is directed to anyone who has read the comic. Does it ever really say that the tuft of fur on their head is hay-colored? The mangas are gray, white, and black, and there was no official colored pic of Little Mew or Husker. I mean, how many cats have a gray pelt yet a tawny piece of fur on their heads? I could very well be a lighter shade of gray, or white. It's kinda like Graystripe's muzzle in the manga. It's a lighter shade of gray on the cover, and it's the same color as Little Mew's tuft in the manga. Now, if I should be proved wrong, Dawn, the pic is good, he's very cute, but maybe move the yellow back a bit away from his eyes, and up towards the top of his head. Also, the dark marks on it make it look like macaroni. -- Bramble My Realm 03:25, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

There's a place on the official website that we can ask the authors stuff. <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 17:22, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

To be honest I just read the hay colored part on his description. Now that I think about it, it can be any color lighter than his pelt color. And Mistyfur, the official website is false so that Ask Erin Hunter thing is most likely false to. Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  20:01, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I made it a light gray. It still doesn't look okay. I'm wondering if this is able to be made good enough to be approved. It's a pretty awkard picture. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 07:35, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh he doesn't look awkward. He actually looks really cute now. -- Bramble My Realm 16:37, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I like this actually Dawn! I read the manga today to see how they showed him... it was kind of like a massive monobrow sticking out of his head and it wasn't said to be any particular colour, just shown as lighter. I think this looks realistic (well, as realistic as a patch of lighter fur is ever going to look). You've done a good job and I can't see any other problems right now Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:37, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval in 24 hours? Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 16:09, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Leader blanks - For approval
(M) - Alright! I've drawn cats for awhile now, so I thought I'd put it to good use!


 * Double lineart? Cheak.


 * About the right size? Cheak.

All it needs is a transparent bckground. Could somebody do that for me please? I know how to do it, but I've had some troubles and I don't want to risk anything! Thanks! Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 19:55, 19 June 2009 (UTC)



OMG, ur so good! =] This are real good. Lets see what everyone else says- but wait, some pplz made leaders with the warrior blanks... <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 20:06, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


 * I've done the transparency for you and had no problems with pixlr... don't know what that was about. As for the images. I like the position you've chosen and overall they are very good. There are a few things though. Firstly their backs are quite bumpy... Secondly, their heads are quite small and could be a bit bigger. I also think the fur on the belly of the longhaired looks strange and needs to be a bit... neater (that sounds so stupid). We also nede to think about how easy they'll be to colour. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 20:13, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanies! I think the people who made leaders with warrior blanks understood that leader blanks would be made one day. Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 20:18, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Do you mean that they coloured Bluestar in a warrior blank for example. If so then the reason for that is that we are eventually hoping to get images of all ranks every cat has ever upheld. They will all be added to a character's page together. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 20:20, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I'll fix these some more tomorrow... but for now, the fur and backs have been fixed on the male and female longhaired. Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 21:35, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

There is gray on the picture? <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 01:51, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

That's the transparent background Mistfur Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 13:32, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

'''(M) - Note: I will be gone for the next week or so. Please do not delete these images. I am planning to work on them as soon as I am done with camp. Thank you.''' Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 21:17, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Webfoot- For Approval
-makes mental note to lay of on tabbies for a while---<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 06:50, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

I really like it, except the markings next to the eye don't look right. Make a wave from the eye, and maybe a fork form the whiskers. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 06:52, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

The marking on the cheek looks, odd. It looks too much like the actual cheek.Minnowclaw 22:25, 20 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Changed eye mark.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 07:51, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

It should be longer and in this shape ~ --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather  09:37, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Why lay off on the tabbies? It looks great! <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 22:13, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

There is some smudging outside of the line art around the tail. Minnowclaw 22:48, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Fixed the smudging and removed the eye-mark. It was too much trouble, and I couldn't get the shape right.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 07:16, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I think you should try again with the eye mark. I think it really needs it! -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 10:46, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think so Dawn, it looks good.Minnowclaw 02:48, 25 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Added it anyway. (I've had it done for a day or so now.. I must have forgotten to upload...)--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 07:11, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Deputy blanks - for approval
Yes, I edited the warrior blanks, but when you think about it, they wouldn't look any different. I put the tail down because it said most young warriors and apprentices had their tails strait up in excitement and I thought that when a cat was the deputy, they would look wiser so I put the tail laying down. I put the front foot behind the pic because maybe they had put a cat for the hunting patrol and dawn patrol and was frustrated and hit the ground. Feel free to hate it...Minnowclaw 22:24, 20 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I like how you changed the paw, but i think that the old tail looks better. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 00:15, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Should I put it back to normal or can you give me tips to make it better?Minnowclaw 00:23, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I think that you should probably put the tails back to normal. It's hard to make realistic tails. Exanding on what I said earlier, the paw makes them look comanding, and busy. (That is a good thing) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather 02:29, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I actually think the tails look good down... it further makes them look different from the warrior blanks and also is a pose that just looks dignified. I don't know. Dawn, let's see what some others think. I could be overrided. -- Bramble My Realm 03:14, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Minnowclaw and Bramble. <font color="LightBlue" style="background:Red">Lavastream, <font color="LightPurple" style="background:Pink">SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 12:38, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Should I just wait or is there something I can work on now?Minnowclaw 18:53, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

To further more make it different, I put the ear down, was it better the first time?Minnowclaw 19:33, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Keep them up. When their ears are down it makes them looks submissive and less like a deputy. Also more resembles a puppy. -- Bramble My Realm 19:35, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I like these but I the shorthaired look like they're sitting on their tails... Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 19:46, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah. Move the tails up a pixel, so they're partially covering the paws. (Sandy, if you read this, get on the IRC. :) -- Bramble My Realm 19:50, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Is this better?Minnowclaw 21:14, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw


 * The paw up like that is a good idea, but I don't like it. It looks like The leg on Cinderpelt that I crippled. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 21:34, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Yours was completely bent backward, where here you can see a curve. They don't look the same. Minnowclaw, not that much. :) Keep the size of the tail the same and just move it up one pixel over the paws. You know, just sort of skim the bottom off. And one if the pics still has an ear down. -- Bramble My Realm 21:55, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Good?Minnowclaw 22:19, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Yeah, lots better. Anyone else have anything? -- Bramble My Realm 22:25, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

The tails on the shorthaired are bothering me. They're too straight, almost nothing is perfectly straight in nature. Curve the tail a little bit. Like the longhaired one, just don't make it as thick. :) --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 23:31, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 00:12, 22 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Much better! --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 03:38, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

The shorthair's tail still looks to strait at the point where it bends. --<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 07:18, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

The tail is like at a right angle. Maybe make it a bit more curved instead. -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 10:49, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Good?Minnowclaw 15:07, 22 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It's better, but it could be a little more curved. -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 06:31, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Ok, but this is as far as it goes now.Minnowclaw 15:01, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Better. Something about that bent leg's bothering me though... it looks like it's really thin and flexible... like plastocine... Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:34, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps on the curved leg, you could make the straight line that makes up the far edge a bit more curved? Just to see how it looks. -- Bramble My Realm 23:23, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

But that would make it a half circle, sort of... I'll try it.Minnowclaw 00:34, 24 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

What about this?Minnowclaw 19:41, 24 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

They both look fine to me, but we'll see how Sandy likes the new ones. -- Bramble My Realm 01:29, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Lol. Much better. I like these now. Sorry for being so picky, but it was really bothering me! Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 15:28, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Hang on - are you sure these are the right version of the shorthaired as the tails are back to being weird and the leg hasn't changed on the shorthaired ones. The longhaired are great though Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 16:11, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Snowfur - For Approval


Tried a new shading style with her. I'm not sure if I like it. What do you guys think? -- Bramble My Realm 17:23, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Try making the shading a tad bit darker.Minnowclaw 18:59, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Made the shading a touch darker. Anything else? -- Bramble My Realm 22:03, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Aaaa, hmm..., I got nothin'.Minnowclaw 22:45, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It looks beautiful! I'd say it's ready for approval now. --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 23:25, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I like her too, but wasn't she long haired? -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 08:15, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

People edit our articles, and sometimes they are wrong. I can't find anywhere that says she's longhaired in the books. However, I did find in the BP excerpt that she has gray ear tips, so I'll change those. -- Bramble My Realm 15:46, 22 June 2009 (UTC)


 * She could use more shading on her back and a little on her stomach area.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 01:30, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Added some more shading and gray ear tips. -- Bramble My Realm 12:28, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

You need to blend that gray part in more. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:04, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I wasn't very happy with them, so I made them a touch lighter and blended more. And Dawn, sorry if I offended you by snapping after you asked if she was long-haired. It was a reasonable question, and I was very tired so I snapped. I'm sorry. -- Bramble My Realm 01:27, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Actually I heard that Snowfur was long-haired she-cat.User:Stonestar

Can you give me a page number? -- Bramble My Realm 02:18, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, I wasn't offended. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 06:05, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

' I could feel the cold blasts of wintry air in the forest world, although they could not pierce my thick white fur. ' Secrets of the Clans, pg 77. It Implies that she has long fur. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 07:20, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm... I guess I always regarded thick fur as like dense fur, and not necassarily long fur. But just to make you guys happy I've redone her as longhaired. How does she look now? -- Bramble My Realm 21:00, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Brindleface - Withdrawn


I'm surprised that no one has done Brindleface yet. She just seems like a cat that everyone on here would be jumping on. I had a hard time trying to figure out what she looked like. In all the allegiances, she's just known as a "pretty tabby", on here she's described as a dappled gray tabby, in Into the Wild it says she's pale gray with darker flecks, just like her kits, and we of course have her name, Brindleface. So here we have a light gray cat with a ton of tabby marks a lot of dark flecks. If you have any suggestions, please suggest! <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 22:26, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * EDIT1 Darkened eye. --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 00:54, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

It's confirmed in the books she's gray tabby, like her kits. She is vacker (Swedish word for beautiful). Maybe you can do her queen blank as well. The only thing is that I think she has green eyes. -- Bramble My Realm 22:31, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Yep, page 97 of Forest of Secrets, if you want a reference. -- Bramble My Realm 22:40, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

► Bramble Okay, thanks! I'm glad the tabby think works. I'd be happy to do her queen blank! And she does have green eyes. I made them more pale, like Ferncloud's. <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 23:17, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

The only thing is that the green is similar to her gray pelt and it's hard to see. Can you make the green a bit more pronounced? -- Bramble My Realm 23:43, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

► Bramble Okay, I shall do so! --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 00:54, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

It's good, but I'm with Bramble. Change the eye. I actually did have a go at Brindleface, but It turned out pretty horribele so I didn't upload it. (What do you think of my nwe sig? I'm not sure myself.)... -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 08:17, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

► Dawnfeather I darkened it a little bit, but you're right it still blends in with the gray. Should I make it more saturated? I'm sure your Brindleface couldn't have been too horrible, nothing else you do is. And I like your new sig! Although at first I didn't know who you were. :) Do you want me to keep calling you Dawnfeather or start calling you Minnowberry? --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud  17:42, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Nah, Minnowberry is just a name I like. I am sort of obsessed with '--berry'/ Minnowberry, Bumbleberry, Hollyberry, Juniperberry, Iceberry, Smokeberry, Goldenberry, Leafberry (Berryleaf), Brindleberry? Fernberry doesn't really work... Anyways, I like the prefix berry. About the pic, I suggest you just spen some time experimenting wit eye colours until you find the colour that blends in the least. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 07:11, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

'''I am going to withdraw both my Patchfoot and Brindleface images. My computer is loaded with viruses, and I can't do anything without 7 different fake spyware alerts popping up in my face. Once I get a new computer, I'll continue working on them. I'd like to keep these two on reserve, because obviously I have done them. Sorry about this!''' --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 17:21, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Queen Blanks - For Approval


I have to thank Minnowclaw for bringing this up. These blanks here are not mine, I claim absolutely no ownership; they belong to Melonlemon. She left, and these were declined. But many people liked them, and there were only a few minor things even wrong with them. On her page, User:Melonlemon, it says we may edit/use her images, and that she's leaving. These are very good, and it would be a waste if we just threw them away. Now, I have done the tweakings that needed to be done; Darkhallows: got rid of that flip on the longhair's tail; Goldencloud: unenclosed the toes on the paws; and Dawnfeather: shrunk the ears. Whew, okay, is there anything else that needs to be done? Will make changes later, I have to go do my dad's FD present. -- Bramble My Realm 23:01, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I never edited this. I think you're confusing me with someone else. :) <span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 23:21, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh no Goldie. :) I meant the comment you put in it's section. Look at Declined Art 6, under the queen blanks section, and you'll see that you made a comment on it. -- Bramble My Realm 23:40, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Here, is this better: I fixed the ears, as Dawnfeather said they were too big, I got rid of a flip on the longhair tail, as Darkhallows said it looked unnatural, and I got rid of the enclosed toes on the paw, as Goldencloud said they looked odd. -- Bramble My Realm 23:45, 21 June 2009 (UTC)


 * The hind legs, the top curve on it should curve outward, not inward. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 00:20, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Done. -- Bramble My Realm 00:26, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I get what you're saying now. I wondered what happened to these queen blanks, I had remembered that they were really good. I'm glad you're re-posting them, Bramble! --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 00:56, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Also, th lines need to be thicker, and there are little lines infront of the ears... -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 08:18, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Thickened the outside lineart, does it look better? -- Bramble My Realm 15:35, 22 June 2009 (UTC)



Here's an example of what they would look like used. (I did this before I thickened the lineart and didn't feel like making changes.) -- Bramble My Realm 15:38, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Meh, I couldn't sleep for the guilt, so I changed it. -- Bramble My Realm 16:30, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I think these look amazing! And I love the one you colored! Once these are approved, you should actually post her as a queen. If you don't, I'll steal it and do it myself! :P Just kidding I wouldn't do that. Or would I? --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 17:53, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Lol Goldie. I actually didn't think she was that good. It's Silverstream, btw, in case that was hard to guess. :) -- Bramble My Realm 17:57, 22 June 2009 (UTC)


 * These look great, oh how I missed this blanks, but do you see the little lines near her right (our left) ear? It looks very sketchy like stinking out against the image. You should erase them. It looks like its the leftovers from when you shrunk the ears. Just fix this and I believe their perfect. Amazing job Bramble!-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 01:28, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

It's like there is 'inside' line art and 'outside' line art. As soon as the line art stops being on the very outside, it gets a pixel or two thiner.-- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 09:03, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I thickened all lineart, except for facial area and and some small ones, and erased those little lines by the ear, thanks for pointing that out, Shim. What else? -- Bramble My Realm 12:22, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

The changes didn't upload, so I did it again. -- Bramble My Realm 23:12, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

They look good. -<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 06:10, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any problems now. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 10:58, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

No one seems to have a problem. Comments before approval in 24 hours?--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 07:20, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Tornear - for Approval


Here's the old grey wc tom... he needs to retire soon; younger cats than him are already in the elders' den... lol. Anyway, constructments? Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 17:17, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

'Constructments', Sandy? ;) Well, the only thing I see is that he's tabby. And I know this for sure. His description in the allegiance has always been tabby tom, and it said in the books somewhere that he was gray. Those are my constructments. XD -- Bramble My Realm 17:28, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Constructments - comments/constructive critisism (quicker to write lol). I am such a mouse brain. I'll go fetch him some markings :) Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:55, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I added tabby markings but they might not be showing yet. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 19:13, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh, that makes sense now. Your tabby stripes look great. I don't see anything else wrong. He looks just as I pictured Tornear, except with a more irate expression on his face. -- Bramble My Realm 12:27, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the constructments Bramble :p Is there anything else anyone? Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 19:49, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Your welcome, Sandy. :) Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 01:23, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Wolfkit - For Approval
I wasn't sure which one to upload first so I went randomly. Runnningkit will be next, then Smallkit. -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 06:38, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't see any problems. Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  19:41, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I got nothing. Lovely. -- Bramble My Realm 23:21, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Mmmm.... I thought that the shading on her chest was messy, so I spent a while clearing it up. Any thoughts? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 09:14, 24 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Her eyes should be blue, since she's a kit. Kits with unknown eye color should hjave blue eyes. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 12:43, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

According to her character page, she has amber eyes. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:47, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

If her eyes are said to be amber (do you have a book reference Dawn?) then they should be amber even in kit form Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 15:52, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Runningkit - For Approval
Runningkit is now uploaded, as I promised. What do you think? -<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:19, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

The shading on his neck and around his mouth needs to be smaller :) Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:27, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 07:08, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Good. I can't see anything else Dawn Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 10:54, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Should he be lighter? He's only described as brown tabby, and this is more like dark tabby. Other than that he's great. -- Bramble My Realm 02:02, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Lightened him. Anything else? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 07:13, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink a little as it's standing out a lot more now you've lightened him Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 15:42, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Reedshine- For Approval
I tried, and I'm pretty sure I got her fur color right on. Yay for Reedshine! <3 -<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;green; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lightgreen;"> Sandiwolf

It looks very, well, I can't really say. Oh, It looks like you went nuts with the sharpen tool.Minnowclaw 16:16, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I love the colour but Minnow is right; more blur tool neeeded all over! Alao, the ear pink needs to be, well, pink (but not too bright and make sure it's blended) Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:26, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Also, she needs a puil and highlight in her eye. Take a look at the way some other approved warriors' eyes have been done for guidance. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:28, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I blended the shading more, and added a much needed highlight and shade on the shoulder. I made the ear pink more distinct and added the pupil and highlight to the eye. Anything else?--Sandiwolf 19:27, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

It actually looked like you painted it! And did you use MS paint? Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  19:45, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I use MS Paint to make blanks (Which I won't be doing anymore). I use Gimp to color, because it's a lot more efficient for shading. --Sandiwolf 19:56, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Very vacker (I'm sorry, I have Swedish class and must practice; means beautiful). But that highlight that stretches out into the torso from the chest needs to be blended or taken out. -- Bramble My Realm 23:20, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Thank you, and blended ;D --Sandiwolf 13:39, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

The ear looks darker around the edges. Maybe you could make it one color, then blend. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:38, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

To-be Blanks- For Approval


These were going to be for Deputy, but I saw that Deputy blanks were already made, and New Warrior Blanks were Desired. How about these ones? Male and Female Shorthairs and Longhairs. (Wow, I'm just spitting out artwork lately o3o. I have too much time on my hands) -<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;green; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lightgreen;"> Sandiwolf

They're good, but to small, make them a little bit bigger. Also, I think the nose might be too long, make it the littlest bit shorter.Minnowclaw 16:12, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Oh afterthought, the lines on the tail of the long hair looks like they've been cut. Also, It was just thought that we needed more girlish cats for the warriors, these are way different and we would have to redo all of the other blanks when we could just do a little fix. Maybe you can work on that? (Don't get me wrong, these are great.)Minnowclaw 17:06, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I'm glad you like them, and as a note: MS Paint + Bigger = pixelated fail. Dx. But anywho, under Desirable Blanks, it stated specifically this:

DESIRABLE BASES * Warrior o More feminine looking Female Longhair Base o More masculine looking Male Longhair Base So I assumed that a new female and male blank were needed. D= --Sandiwolf 19:31, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Yes that is true, but we have many warrior pictures already approved. It would take a very long time to redo them with the new blanks unless they had been a quick fix. Put your work to the test. These bases are really great and can be used in other parts maybe. Also, I'm only a warrior in the project. So if a senior warrior or Bramble thinks we can use these, well, I don't have the power to say anything against it.Minnowclaw 20:37, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

They look a little to... cute to be warriors. Maybe Tribe To-be's? They look young. But I really love them and they should be used as something.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 21:26, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Could we use them as apprentice blanks? Please don't ban me for saying this, as I'm not bashing the apprentice blanks but just criticizing them, but I never really liked them that much. Don't get me wrong, they're good, but they look like they needed more work before they were approved. But I really really really like these! I definitely want to use them as something! --<span style="font-family:Anime Ace; color;#00B8E6; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds:3em; color:#00B8E6;">Goldencloud 21:32, 23 June 2009 (UTC)


 * The heads look cartoony, and I think we don't need a completely new base, just modify the old one. Because then, what about the other accepted cats made with the old ones? Plus, they look like wolves. I think tribe-to-be's would be the best use for these. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 22:36, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Sorry I didn't show up sooner, i had marching band camp. Welcome to PCA, Sandiwolf. :) These look great, though I agree with Mallinois and Darkhallows they'd be better used as tribe to-be's. About 3/4's of our approved images are warriors, and it would take too long to redo all of them. Now, on the images, the she-cats need whiskers (in kittykat world, the females have whiskers :) And the lineart needs to be thickened to go with our other blanks. Also, the hind legs on all of them is bent at a right angle, make it a bit more natural. That's about it for now. Great job! -- Bramble My Realm 23:18, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I reckon they could be something from the Tribe. Cave Guard, Prey Hunter, or To-Be. -<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 06:13, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree in that we shouldn't really change the warrior blanks as we'll have to start the whole project basically from scratch... I like these for to-bes though! Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 08:16, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Again the lineart needs to be thicker in keeping with all the current blanks. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 13:35, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the legs and thickened the lineart. --Sandiwolf 13:38, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Are they prey-hunter to-bes or cave guard to-bes? Also, you need to thicken the line art on the short hairs and all around to blank. Minnowclaw 01:01, 25 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Kittypet Blanks- For Approval
I swear this is the last thing I'll do today, so I don't flood the list. anyways, I saw that Kittypet Blanks were being CONSIDERED. So if they are ever needed, I made these. --Sandiwolf 15:50, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

The bodies are too big for the head, make the head bigger or the body smaller. Also, the bodies look to muscular when kittypets are supposed to be softer. The tails on the long hairs' still look like they are cut. Also, on the long hairs, the collars look like they have been cut, is that fur?Minnowclaw 16:15, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The ears are a very strange shape - perhaps make them thinner and slightly more pointed. Also, the longhaired tails look a bit like candyfloss - get rid of some of the small lines. Their backs are very flat and there is some discrepancy between the two longhaired versions - either make the back fluffy or not. Also, the lineart needs to be thicker to fit in with the existing blanks. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 18:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Minnow: I made the bodies a tad smaller. They're also meant to look fat, not muscular. Furthermore, yes, that is in fact fur. Sandy: I'm not used to doing thickly outlined drawings, but I did my best to edit them. I added fur to the longhair male's back, and fixed the longhair tails. The ears? I made them thinner and taller.--Sandiwolf 19:14, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I just looked on the reservations page and Dawnfeather has already reserved Kittypet blanks... Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 19:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Awhhh. T.T

I should really be more observant. When I'm not it results in my Depression. There goes another day of wasted work. I'll find something eventually, but for now, would you like me to take these down?--Sandiwolf 19:54, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Are you using MS paint? Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  19:54, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

For these, yes. My good old MS Paint and a mouse. --Sandiwolf 19:57, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Maybe it won't be wasted. You can talk to Dawnfeather and if she still wants to do them, get rid of the collar and they can be loners or rouges.Minnowclaw 20:33, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I don't mind. Your's are much better, and I was going to take down that thing tonight unless I could get some good progress from them today. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 08:22, 24 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Cave-guards. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 22:49, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Same thing with the hind legs as I said on your other pics. Make the transition more natural. -- Bramble My Realm 23:26, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Mine are not as good as these. I have had a lot of trouble with mine as I started them in paint... Anyways. these are more in our style and look good. Kittypets, or CaveGuards, Rogues, Loners. I think they would work whatever. -<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 06:15, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the back leg, and thank you Dawnfeather.--Sandiwolf 13:29, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I think that you should fiddle around with the chin a bit to make it a bit rounder and lower, so it will be more in the style of the other blanks. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 11:42, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Hello Can I Join?
Hello, I'm Yai-Girl, a new member in Warriors Wiki. I love drawing and hope that I can join. At first, I had trouble joining but, thanks to Bramble and Sandy, I connected. May I join as a new member? Thanks, --Yai-Girl 16:27, 23 June 2009 (UTC)Yai-Girl

Of course, Yai. I added you to the template. If you have any questions then just ask :) Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 19:46, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

What sites do you use for the pictures?

Sites I've heard are good are Pixlr. But you can download Gimp and Photoshop. When I downloaded Gimp it was free. Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  23:34, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Again, I'm having problems. When I went on www.pixelr.com it said that it was under construction. When I went on www.photoshop.com It said I had to create an account with my real names and I would like to keep my identity secret. Finely, when I went on www.gimp.com the computer searched another website.--Yai-Girl 15:11, 24 June 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

It's gimp.net. Also, you don't need to sign ~ Yai-Girl, just ~. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:40, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

try www.pixlr.com again. It was probably just a very temporary thing. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 11:43, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

White-eye - For Approval
He she is. Meh, this drawing was way to easy. I would love to get Blossomkit up... because she REALLY needs help. But meh... that can wait.--<span style="color: darkblue; background:#gold; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:darkblue;"> Darkhallows Lair 21:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

She looks nice. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 09:03, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any problems. Nice work Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 14:50, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

It looks great, Darkhallows. I love how you did the eye. Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 01:22, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

The highlight spot on the shoulder goes too close to the chest at the bottom. The bit on the neck doesn't look entirely right to me either. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 11:44, 25 June 2009 (UTC)


 * I know she's called white-eye, but could you add very pale color to the eye? It looks lifeless now. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 16:11, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Marshkit - For Approval


Tallpoppy's little kit... who disappeared. Comments? Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 12:38, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

The tabby markings could stand out a little tiny bit more. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:49, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I made them darker if the change ever shows. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 13:34, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

The eye looks a bit weird. Maybe try something with the pupil or darken the yellow.--<font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior♥ <font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior's Palace 22:30, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I darkened the eyes and the tabby stripes are showing up darker now too. Anything else? Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 15:41, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Toadfoot - For Approval


Thought I may as well complete the trio, so here's the only one of her litter to actually become a warrior... shame as I quite fancied Birchfall/Applekit having a cross-clan friendship! lol Comments? Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 12:38, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I think that the eye marking should be more of a wave, extended a bit further too. (My cat encyclopedia and my tabby cat all have the 'bout inch and a half long wave from the eye on a tabby). More forbidden love? I agree though, they would be sweet together. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:48, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

yes, more forbidden love. I agree that it's overused by this is different... not just a love at first sight kinda love (bleh) but a friendship + something more kinda love. That's what the Clans are missing. That would be a forbidden love that we haven't yet seen (I mean there wasn't even any evidence for spottedxfire... I never saw it coming and didn't even realise they loved each other until after she died.) Anyway, I'll take that to the forum lol. I changed the eye marking. Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 13:31, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Maybe make him more darker? He's (I think) described as a dark brown tabby tom. BUt other than that I think this is amazing. Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  19:36, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Actually, when I checked the Allegiances, he's described as just a dark brown tom. :) I also checked in the actual book. This is kind of ironic, Tornear needed stripes and Toadfoot has stripes he doesn't need. So Sandy, take out the tabby stripes, even though they look great. -- Bramble My Realm 01:21, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Ahh... I'm gonna stop trusting the articles on here for descriptions... :( I'll get onto it asap Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 15:24, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay, asap is now. Done Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 15:51, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Looks awesome but there's a grey color outside the lineart. It's by the tail.--<font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior♥ <font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior's Palace 19:12, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Willowclaw - for approval


Well I hope this can be as good as my Loudbelly. Any improvemental comments? Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  05:56, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

The shadin at the back of the neck needs to go all the way up to the ear. It is currently stopping just short. (Improvemental, nice. I like coming up with words.) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 11:46, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

The head needs shading, put some front leg shading, and maybe blend it some more because it looks a bit lumpy.--<font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior♥ <font face="Mistral" color="Purple">Warrior's Palace 15:27, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Cloudberry-for approval
I wanted to do a gray riverclan cat, so here's the worst textured cat ever, Cloudberry. (Dawnfeather, notice it ends in -berry :) --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 16:42, 25 June 2009 (UTC)