Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Dapplenose (A) For Approval
fail,fail,such a fail.The sun is the left corner not the right.That's why the shading is on the bottom. S n i c k e r s 11 Days! 23:35, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to resave the blank. Here:



Also, look at a turtorial for the eyes. And I can't see much shading.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:54, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I resized it:

It's going to need to be blurred a lot more to look like her other images and shading. Dark hallows 01:44, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blurring tool is very bad,but I'll try. S n i c k e r s  8 Days! 21:09, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

CoughUseGIMPcoughcough ;) The blurring tool is at least twice as strong as pixlr's. insane  brick'd 21:39, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thats's why I don't use Pixlr... GIMP is so much better (I also have photoshop, but never use it...) Dark hallows 23:12, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to get on any art program for a couple days....Dunno why.Give me ummm 4 days. S n i c k e r s  7 Days! 18:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more. And the line art is messed up at the eye area. FrostHeart 03:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said, I'll try to blur it more. S n i c k e r s   7 Days! 19:45, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  S n i c k e r s   3 Days! Whoohoo! 19:46, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr is fine and is in my opinion better the GIMP once you know how to use it properly. I'll make a tutorial in a day or so showing you how. xD For the image: Blur the hgihlights some more. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:06, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Will do. $ Coolstar  $  19:50, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Needs to be blurred and smudged some more to look like her elder and warrior image, try going for a smoother effect :) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 00:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Rrrr. Pixlr froze when I opened it.Not again. =( I'll keep trying to get it to work. ~ Blue Lightning Strikes! I'm so shocked  11:42, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Snickers Oh the simpleness of simple stuff  13:10, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye line art and I think this will be ready. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:09, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where...Oh never mind, I see.Will do. Snickers Oh the simpleness of simple stuff  21:16, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedGol den thorn Epic! 11:51, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful! --  Sky dragon Ride the wind 23:31, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! *blushes* Snickers

Comments? Gol den thorn Epic! 14:07, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome! Just add some more highlights! :Sun spirit  ☮ 05:01, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I have highlights.... Snickers!

The highlights look fine to me but the eye still bothers me. I think it's the way you colored it. It looks too big. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eye.I had an extra white space in it, that's why it looked weird. Gol den thorn Epic! 21:09, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Make the ear pink more visible. Icefall Icy Winds 22:07, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

The eye line art still isn't quite right. It looks like the pixels for the eye lash was moved up a bit. Can you try fixing that?-- Night s h i n e   R  05:47, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! I'll have it done in a few minutes. OMG...You killed It! 12:23, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMG...You killed It!  12:38, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the fur. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! Here comesSUMMER!   23:36, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and make it smaller. I agree with Mouse, lighten the fur. Icefall Icy Winds 22:32, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

You're right, the ear pink out turned weird.... Z Nightsong  01:06, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Z  Nightsong  13:29, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Add some tail shading. I also can't see the eye color very well. Dark hallows 23:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Z  Nightsong 17:16, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be more triangular and the darker patches need blending more. -- Sandy star 12:15, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to work on this 'till the 27th.Please don't decline.  Z  Nightsong 00:43, June 22, 2010 (UTC) Reuploaded Nevermind about my previous comment, I was thinking about July.  Z  Nightsong 17:08, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything. Icefall Icy Winds 20:12, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Z  Nightsong 13:05, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit pinker. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:19, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try and see if you can make the base color a darker color, like the warrior and elder picture Tot  all  yta  wny  pelt Feelin' the heat!


 * I disagree, the colouring looks fine to me, but the ear pink is the wrong colour as Ash said. Fix that and personally I think it's good to go. -- Sandy star 14:15, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will have to be declined (which would be a shame as it is so close to approval) -- Sandy star 14:47, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to it in a bit. I had computer problems. Z  Nightsong 19:05, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any better?  Z  Nightsong 19:34, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit more redish.

it looks good Nightmask 00:28, July 3, 2010 (UTC)Nightmask Nightmask 00:28, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - This might just be my computer, but I can't see the shading very well. I know it's going to be harder to see the shading on a cat patterned like this, but on her other images I could see it a bit more. Everything else looks beautiful! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 13:00, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

I just looked at an ear pink chart and I'm pretty sure it's right. I'll work on the shading. -- . Silverstar  . talk  14:29, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did it help? -- . Silverstar  . talk  14:50, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is better but you got some color outside the lineart. The earpink still seems off to me when I look at her other images. Ashshadow Ag 14:57, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Compare the ear pink colour on yours to her other images. It's purplish on yours. Hers is very red. Take the colour from her warrior/elder image. ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:55, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I just noticed the lineart thing now, and I'll work on the ear pink soon. -- . Silverstar  . talk  22:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed lineart and took the ear pink color from her elder image. Anything else? -- . Silverstar  . talk   15:42, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W) For Approval
So here he is. He's my first one, so I know he's not that great, but what do you think? Let me know if this is under the limit; I think it is, but I'm not sure. Skydragon 18:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow this is really good perhaps where you put the stripe below his ear you should've put another stripe as on his leader image he has two grey stripes either side. Hope that helps :D :)Wildear~101:) 18:32, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but the file needs to be named Gorsestar.warrior.png. Jpg files dont have the best quality and look pixilated. Besides that darken the shading a bit. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice :) Thicken the stripes a bit, in addition to what Wildear and Ashshadow have said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is this better? Skydragon 21:30, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It still looked funny to me, so I fixed it again. Skydragon 18:24, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few more stripes on his haunch and tail and thicken them a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  01:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I don't think he has any more stripes on his tail in his leader image. Is this better though? Skydragon Ride the wind.... 02:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Move the tail stripes up more. Lengthen the stripes on his haunch a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:32, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Lengthened the stripes and moved the ones on his tail. Skydragon Ride the wind.... 17:52, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and this should be ready-- Night s h i n e   R  06:33, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the shading. Skydragon Listen...the wind is singing... 14:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice, Skydragon! There's just one thing that's bugging me; on the first tabby stripe going down the back, there's a pixel that sits in between the Y fold. Does that make any sense to you? Holly dapple  01:54, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

It bugged me too, but I looked at the leader image and it was in the leader image, so... -- Snickers

Oh, okay, then. Sorry. If anything, brighten the highlights on the face. If you don't use highlights (I don't think they're neccesary), then don't bother, but it looks like you do, so maybe try that. Holly dapple  03:22, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added a highlight to the face.  Sky dra gon    Follow the wind...  14:46, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be my moniter but I can barely see the shading. Can you darken it more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:16, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''darkened shading.  Sky dragon Ride the wind 18:35, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try changing the color of the ear pink to a more darker color, like on Ashfoot. This looks really nice! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 14:02, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is that better? It's not darker, but it's closer to Ashfoot's.  Sky dragon Ride the wind 14:50, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I think that looks much better....can't really see anything else. Good job! =D -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 19:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes. Mo onp elt TM 23:15, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

No, it matches the leader image. I think it looks fine.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  23:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I'm gonna be gone until about the 20th of this month, and I won't be able to work on him. Please don't delete him. Thanx!-- Whisper on the wind   Skydragon  03:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know...I think it needs more stripes. <font color="Turqoise">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 03:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like his leader image. I tink it has the right number of stripes; you can't even see the entire side of his body in the leader image anyway. Kaoru  Hitachiin  21:43, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

He does need to add a couple more stripes to the (our) right foreleg. <font color="#009900">  M  o  o  n  p  e  l  t   1786 22:06, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know about that, Moonpelt, because I've been working on Gorsestar's deputy image, so I've been studying the leader image very hard, and I haven't seen any other stripes on that foreleg, though Skydragon does need to add one of those funny spots to it. Holly dapple  15:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and make it bigger. Lighten the stripes a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 22:32, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hi everybody, I'm back! I added the spot on his foot and darkened the ear, but I didn't do anything to the stripes because I used the same color as on his leader image. Let me know if I still need to lighten them!

I'd lighten them a tinsy bit, I think the shading makes them look too dark. Thicken the stripe on his front leg farthest from us, and darken the shading on both the front legs Night  Fall 00:39, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened the shading on his legs, and I tried to thicken that one stripe and lighten the others. Let me know if it worked.

Blur the tabby markings, on the tail, and desaturate the ear pink. Dawny  00:20, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the markings on his tail and desaturated the ear pink.

Make the stripes a little longer Night  Fall 04:19, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and darken the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lengthened the stripes, but I can't darken the shading or ear much more before they get too dark.

Okay, just blur the stripes slightly and he looks good to me. -- Sandy star 16:37, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred the stripes. Anything else?

I would say to make the ear pink bigger, and darken it. Icefall★ Talk 13:51, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the ear pink needs to be any bigger or darkened. It seems to be large enough to me, and it also looks too dark. You should lighten it again. Holly dapple  18:02, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Sooo... am I darkening it or lightening it? -- Sky Storm's brewing... 22:59, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say lighten it. And make it more red, right now it looks too purple. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 14:51, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? -- Sky Storm's brewing... 01:43, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Move it up a bit and make it more red--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:18, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How's that? I tried to move it and I used the ear color from his leader image. -- Sky Storm's brewing... 19:55, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Excellent. That looks better. Holly dapple  05:03, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - This is optional, but maybe you could consider adding a mini-highlight to his left foreleg and his tail. If there's a little lighter area there, it makes it looke more rounded. I think the image looks good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 13:04, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit of a pale-ish pink colour, its looking a bit neon right now.-- Dawnleaf 03:22, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is the hindleg away from us (the left one, I think?) could be shaded a touch darker. Holly dapple  04:49, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shaded the leg. Sky dragon Flight of dreams... 22:50, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is consistent with the existing images and I see no issues. Comments before approval? 11:28, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart(W) For Approval
This is like...Horrible. Comments?<font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 01:59, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is great!! Just thicken the shading a lot so it is like his medicine cat image. Blur the stripes more-- Night s h i n e   R  02:03, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? GIMP is SO much better than Pixlr's blurring tool! <font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 22:51, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect! This is really nice. :) Moontail  Me Rocks!  14:42, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand where your light source is from. Most images have the shading on the tail, for example, on the bottom. And, the shading needs serious blurring. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   18:50, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Sorry, it just doesn't blur anymore.<font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 20:23, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the other side a little (the lighter one) so that it looks somewhat even? And the ear pink is too small. 雨 晶須  21:55, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred alot more. I can help if you'd like. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:42, June 8, 2010 (UTC) Thank you Ash :) I'd appreciate it. I spent like 5 minutes on blurring!<font color="Turqoise">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 02:27, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. I've blurred the shading some for you Sky. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan'''  19:39, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I can't tell where the light source is coming from; on the shading of the body it's from one direction, and on the shading of the tail it's from another almost opposite. The light source needs to all be from one direction, so either change the shading on the body or the tail (probably easier on the tail). $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 02:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. Quailflight 07:58, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine as is. It looks like the approved example and I always thought the light was coming from above. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:57, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made earpink bigger. Oh, and thanks Ash <font color="Turqoise">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 22:47, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. If they don't or won't blur, than use the smudge tool to get a similar effect. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   16:39, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and stripes. Icefall Icy Winds 22:28, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred stripes+shading <font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 00:19, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and blur the shading some more Night  Fall 04:20, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest lightining the shading some at this point. This style is hard to blur without destroying the tabby stripes. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  14:19, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shoulder lineart looks weird. Thicken it. Icefall★ Talk 14:22, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long guys. I thickened the back, but how do you lighten the shading? Blab, I sound dumb. <font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 02:36, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I run the dodge tool over my shading a few times when it's too dark. That's the only way I can think of lightening it. Holly dapple  04:58, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree that the shading needs to be lighter, but coiuld you make it smaller, too? Right now, it doesn't look like shading to me, it sort of looks like half of him is darker. Making the shading smaller would fix that. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 13:08, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I based the shading on his medcat image <font color="Lime">Willow <font color="Lime">pool "Let's look for donuts in the wilderness!"  01:20, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading style is okay and has been used on many approved chararts to my knowledge. I think the problem is that it is such a hard transition. And I don't think this is because you haven't tried to blend it - some of the stripes are too smudgy as a result of over-blending - but I think the line was too blunt to start with. Did you use the faded-out brush tool or the normal paintbrush-shaped one? If it's the latter then that may be the problem. 14:58, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ki) - For Approval


Yeah, well, can't say much about this one. Pretty bad, eh? SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 06:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks odd. Try making it bend toward him. Make the stripes more v shaped like his leader image.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:25, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He looks black on my screen. Maybe lighten him a bit? Skydragon Listen...the wind is singing... 14:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow I haven't been on in soooo long... Anyway, he's a tad too dark, like Skydragon said, and I think there are a few gray pixels near the top of his tail (in background). 雨 晶須  21:15, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the top of his tail a bit. It looks mor squished than broken to me. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:45, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've copied the colour from the rogue image, but if it isn't right, then I'll change it. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 13:47, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't exactly understand what you mean by bending the tail, and Ashshadow, how do I make it look broken? Sharpen the bend in the tail? Also, this can only be uploaded again after five - six days. See here. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 13:57, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I just meant thicken the top part a little bit. It looks flatened rather than broken. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:26, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on his chest and forepaws. Holly dapple  04:51, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 07:04, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I've noticed that the other images of Brokenstar. He Is a little bit lighter than that. S u n s p i r i t Gotta Lo ve New leaf 07:26, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I made a redline for what I meant about the tail. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:16, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and sharpen the stripes. Make the lineart on the tail a tad thicker. Icefall Icy Winds 22:27, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 06:44, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the highlight on the chest as it looks like a white smear. -- Sandy star 12:54, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 06:33, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Just saying I think the break in the tail might look better closer to his body. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 13:25, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten him just a tad. 雨 晶須  22:20, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightning talk 04:31, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add two stripes coming out of the corners of his eyes, like his other images. Also, thicken the lineart on his tail tip Night  Fall 04:21, June 25, 2010 (UTC

Define the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten him up a bit. Well, the non-striped area, at least. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 23:28, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

There are some smeary highlights that I would advise you get rid of. -- Sandy star 10:49, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D)- For Approval
Yay! Second charart! =) What should I do to improve it? <font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear pink should be darker, shading needs to be blurred more, and her tail needs more shading. 雨 晶須  23:12, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Close the gaps in the shading and blur it more. Also add shading to the legs and tail. FrostCloud 23:14, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks yellow as opposed to ginger. Try saturating her some Night  Fall 23:19, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, as stated above, and the ear pink needs to be moved more into the ear and lightened. Also, remember to put "For Approval" in the discussion title.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  14:14, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The eye should be made like this: File:Eye Chart.png (see the warrior version), instead of the current eye. The saturation tool is a sponge located near the dodge and shading tools, so use that to saturate the pelt color and give it more of a ginger color. Define the ear pink some more, but not too much. The two hind paws should also have shading, and the top of the head. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 15:35, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading and define the ear pink. Darken the shading on the tail, and add shading to the back paws, and muzzle to the top of the head. The ear not facing us should have shading, too. Ice fall 00:11, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 14:46, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Darken the shading on the main part of her body and darken the earpink. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:37, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well, could be just me, but I don't see any highlights. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 03:33, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Blur the shading-- Night s h i n e   R  03:43, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:20, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Shadings needs to be blurred a bit more and make the ear pink more pinkish, this is good overall ;) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 04:22, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 19:52, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. --  Sky dragon Ride the wind 23:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shadings on the head.. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  02:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:20, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is really sweet :) The back shading is very thick though, maybe thin it a bit? And maybe make the ear pink a bit pinker? On my computer, it looks very red. Brightfrost  of SunClan...  15:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. =) Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:05, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:08, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a lot and blur the shading. The fur colour is a little bright, so I suggest saturating it a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  05:52, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

This may be my monitor, but the white pixel on the eye looks a dull, you might want to brighten it a bit. River pelt Heart of Amber 20:26, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think it might be your monitor, because it looks fine on mine... then again, I'm probably misunderstanding what your talking about. =) However, I did darken the ear pink and blurred the shading and saturated it; is it better? Oh, and by the way, I'm stuck in a summer school session from June 14th to June 25th, so I might have some difficulties getting on to work, but I should be able to. I'm going out of town after that though, and I won't have access to a computer very often, if at all.<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:21, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. It still looks too neon orange coloured. Darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  23:24, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it. Darken the image. Icefall Icy Winds 22:26, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:18, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try desaturating it with the sponge.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:48, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also darken the shading and earpink. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:51, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Did I darken the image too much?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:53, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Way too dark, and bright. It looks neon. Lighten it. Quailflight 20:55, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I'm really confused... how can something be both too dark and too bright at the same time?98.242.242.121 03:30, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, that was me... Sorry, forgot to log in! =) <font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 15:49, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think (I mean think) what Quailflight means is that the dark areas are too dark and the bright areas are too bright, catch my drift? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 16:13, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure I understand, but if not... well, it's always fixable. =) Is this any better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:26, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd say it looks pretty good. =^.^= ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 13:23, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks neon, desaturate it some more. And I can hardly see the ear pink, lighten it some Night  Fall 21:16, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Needs to be desaturated, and shading needs to be darker.-- Dawny  19:00, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:48, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Why is she bright red? Ginger is orange, she should be orange. Any shade of orange, and blur alot more. Spirit cloud48  20:58, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

How is that red? That looks orange to me ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:16, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

R-E-D Spirit  cloud48  21:20, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, now I know how to spell red. And acutally real ginger is pale orange. Just saying! :) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:47, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Im sorry then, you must be color blind. It is most definitly red. Sorry Hollytail about the arguing! Some people cant see that its red; change to ginger, and blur. Spirit cloud48  23:05, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's not red on my computer, it's dark orange. I would suggest lightening it though. Her description isn't dark ginger. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  23:09, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

OK, 1: do I just lighten it or change the color entirely? And 2:please be nice, Spiritcloud48, because that's probably offensive to anyone who is colorblind, and also because your monitor could be displaying it differently on your computer, because you seem to be the only person who thinks it's bright red.<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 02:27, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Lightening it will work unless you just want to start over. The earpink also needs some work. Perhaps take the color from a nother ginger cat of a similiar color and make it a bigger. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  02:36, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

-_- Just for the record I'm not color blind. But you could check Buzzardstar for the earpink. He's a ginger also. :) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:53, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Probably not Buzzardstar, one of the reasons I nominated him for tweak week is because I think his ear pink is way too hot pink. Night Fall 07:48, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Well then you've got me. XD I guess you should look for a ginger cat for examples. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 17:30, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I made it a lighter orange, is this shade any better? As for the earpink color, i tried to make that lighter, too...<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 03:17, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, it still looks kind of neon.... try desaturating it or something.... Tawny SMEASH 11:34, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the front of the haunch and to the tail. Icefall★ Talk 13:47, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

The tail already had shading, but I darkened it a little bit. Is this better? Also, I'm leaving at, like, four a.m. and won't be back til August........<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 18:09, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if we can let you keep an image for a month. You still need to add shading to the front of the haunch. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  01:16, June 29, 2010 (UTC)


 * No way can we leave this here for a month with no hope of it being touched... but what I'm going to suggest is that we call this 'withdrawn' and archive it for now, but allow Hollytail to keep it in her projects until she returns; everyone is entitled to a holiday and sometimes we have little choice in the matter. Ultimately it's up to you though, Bramble. -- Sandy star 14:52, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree with Spiritcloud; it looks Firestar-red to me. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 13:11, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hi I'm back! Is this any better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:12, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back leg farthest from us. 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

She still looks red. It should be like to orange on Ottersplash's pic but a bit darker. <font color="#26b1c8" face="French Script MT" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="French Script MT" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 07:18, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D)~For approval


Okay now I look at this I can now see some major changes but here he is improvements please?

Edit how do you change the pxl on it so I can get it 127x155 pxl I'm not sure if its my computer or not...

Oh yeah this is the biggest size I could get him....:)Wildear~101:) 13:12, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

First,he's a tabby, second, sorry, but it's over the limit.<span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">Gol den <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">thorn Epic! 14:00, June 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * For future reference Wildear, remember to sign with 4 ~ and to get a bigger picture of the blank you have to right click the blanks and select open in new window or new tab. That way you'll have the full size of the blank. With the galleries installed, it takes away the feature of copying the direct size of the image. Stated before this is over the limit so this will have to be declined.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:44, June 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * Ok sorry I thought this might've been ok but I must've counted it wrong...yeah I realised my computer must be wrong in a way I'll take your advice to heart Shimmerpool.:)Wildear~101:) 21:27, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wildear; this can stay here as two images were just approved and there is now room. But for future reference, please count more carefully. Do what Shimmer said and redo the image in the full-sized blank and make him a tabby cat. Also, please put a link in your signature by typing Wildear~101 into your preferences. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 00:20, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay thanks Bramble I'll get it reuploaded for tomorrow:)Wildear~101:) 18:26, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED~ Better? It was what I could at short notice I got art project so I fitted it in anyways!:)Wildear~101:) 19:59, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's not a bad tabby but it needs to look more like his other images here. Also make the earpink more triangular. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:01, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby markings need to be bigger like his other images, and make the earpink more pinkish and blur it some more. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 14:11, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded~Ear pink made more triangular thickened stripes and blurred some more also add some more colour on his haunches anything else?:)Wildear~101:) 19:49, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

He has to many stripes and his color is off. Try taking the color from this--->. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:11, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED~Gave him less stripes and gave him a more brownish grey affect licke his elder image. Like Ash said...anything elses? :)Wildear~101:) 16:18, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes need to strech out father like this: Hope that helps!. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  01:47, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okey dokey I'll get it done for saturday as I am busy a few days:)Wildear~101:) 21:11, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Make sure the stripes don't over lap the line art. Fix the eye and darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  01:36, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

He still looks closer to gray to me than gray-brownish like or whatever he is. I think lightening him should do or unsaturating.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay made him look more the colour he is made sure the lines didn't overlap fixed the eye and darkened ear pink. So anything else? :)Wildear~101:) 13:38, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eye still isn't correct. Look at my tutorial to see what the eye should look like-- Night s h i n e   R  23:43, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 14:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, darken the stripes and blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Also add a pupil in the eye. Icefall Icy Winds 20:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I've sttarted already I'll put it up tomorrow Wildear~101  17:57, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken/blur the shading-- Dark hallows 23:05, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I have done it just have virus on computerso when thats cleared up it will be on sorry its just my time on the computer will be restricted else... Wildear~101 18:49, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Here he is re-uploaded blurred ear darkened stripes re did the eye blurred shading anything else? (btw this took a while to upload my computer froze so..) Wildear~101 15:10, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks kindda funny, and blur the shading. Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 17:18, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

You covered some of the lineart on the back, haunch, and chest. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:44, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are to thick, make them smaller. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;orange; background:khaki; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">☼ Şũήמy ☼ 22:10, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the face, paws, and tail. Blur it, too. I agree with Sunspirit, make the stripes smaller. Icefall★ Talk 13:44, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I will get it uploaded soon just getting rid of viruses on computer then it will be up and ready oh yeah I'll make the stripes smaller but I'm a bit worried they might be too small... Wildear~101 20:05, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - A lot of the lineart is gray. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 01:38, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Please keep this on your resevations list. Dark hallows 00:40, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

A lot of the color is on the lineart. Also, blur the stripes or make them...what's the word? Less thick? Thickless? Anyways, you get the message. Earth bender Tawny Style! 13:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers up for approval (again)
Okay, I tried to make it better, here it is I ran the burn tool along some more-as you told me too. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:01, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading looks nice. Try making the ear pink a little bigger and darkening it up a bit, like on Reedwhisker or Breezepelt. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:25, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. I don't really see any-- Night s h i n e   R  23:29, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened the shading a little, and I darkened the ear-pink. Better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:33, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The whole thing still needs to be darkened. It looks like a dark gray cat on my computer. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:17, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's dark-grey on my computer, I think you should darken it. :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 09:08, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah darken it so it looks more black. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:03, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Should I run the burn tool along it or use another colour comepletely? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:24, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The burn tool should work. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  16:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the entire image and darken the shading/add shading. Icefall Icy Winds 22:22, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

 Reupladed -I used the burn tool a little more. Anything else I can do to improve? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 19:19, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken it more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:26, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading.

Please work on this or it will be declined Night  Fall 04:27, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I burned it some more, but I think it was better before. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 18:39, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Which one are we supposed to look at? Which ever one it still needs to be darkened. The first one looks dark gray and the second one looks silver. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  18:49, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers is black, Clarrissa, not gray. You need to really darken it. Look at Blackclaw, Breezepelt, or Nightcloud for help Night  Fall 06:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Both of the images need to be darkened. Icefall★ Talk 14:24, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, they need to be more like #111111 (just around that range) in color. They're both nice, but they're too light. Another cat to look at would be Crowfeather's kit image. He's not "black", more like a smoky black, so that might be more ideal for you. Holly dapple  18:59, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

No, like I said above, just run the burn tool over it. On pixlr, there's no way to search for the hex code of a color that I know of Night  Fall 00:30, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, there is. You click on those color boxes, and the "colorpicker" window pops up. Near the bottom, on the right below the "L:" text box is th place where you can input a color. Though if Clarrissa wants to, she can run the burn tool over it. What I meant when I said to make it more like #111111 is to make it more of that color, either using that hue or running it over the burn tool to make it more of that color. Sorry if I didn't make that clear enough, but I meant to make it more like #111111. She doesn't have to change the whole color if she doesn't want to. :) Holly  dapple  02:50, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, I didn't know that xD But seriously, just darken it. All you have to do is run the burn tool over it a lot Night  Fall 20:48, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try to re-do it then. Whenever I burn it, it just go's lighter. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 08:58, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

If it gets lighter than you're not burning it. If you use pixlr make sure you're using the burn tool and not the dodge tool. If you're using GIMP make sure it's set to burn and not dodge. This may be where your problem is. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  13:01, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I finally realised that I did it comepletely wrong:P I've burned it right now. Better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 12:08, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. Ashshadow Ag 13:47, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I still think he needs to be darkened. He looks dark gray. Good job, though :) <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 22:52, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tail could use some shading on the bottom, but it's great otherwise! Also, like Ashshadow said, his highlights need to be blurred more. 雨晶須 夏天來了! 01:13, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest making the ear more of a redish tone and making it bigger, and ditto what Blackclaw, said about the shading. Dawnleaf 03:26, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I blurred the highlights, reddened the ear-pink and darkened him. I think he looks a little rubbish :( Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 11:54, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink shouldn't be pure red. Try a color like Whitethroat or Hollyleaf. Ashshadow Ag 14:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -I changed the ear-pink, added shading to the tail, and blurred the shading on the haunch. Improvements? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 12:37, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (R) - For Approval
Well, I'm not sure how this went. Shruggy talk 07:07, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, except you'll notice that there's a black flick on the white chest, maybe lighten the ear pink a bit, but otherwise good! SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 07:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The Black flick, is part of the line art. ;) Shruggy talk 08:56, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh Sorry! Laughs SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:58, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Might just be me Shruggy, but did you pick pure black for the colour? It needs to be light black, dark grey. I can't see the lineart. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  11:47, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, he didn't. This is well done Shruggy. Blur the white, and lighten the pelt color a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 12:06, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also added shading to the back ear. :) Shruggy talk 13:55, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I was on a school comp and it looked really black, it dosen't now. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:21, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Shruggy talk 08:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Looks Great Shruggy! I've been looking at it, couldn't find anything that bad! :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 08:35, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible for you to smudge the white more? Like a fade in? And I think it would look a tiny bit better it there was some shading on the white part on the chest. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:46, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The white on the chest seems awfully straight, I agree with Warrior, just use the smudge tool and then blur to make it. . . um. . . rounder. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   03:11, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? Shruggy talk 11:13, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks very dark. Make the pupil in the eye a bit smaller. Blur the white transitions-- Night s h i n e   R  23:27, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 21:37, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Great! Just add some more highlights. S u n s p i r i t Gotta Lo ve New leaf 23:02, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are acually optional, you don't have to add them if you don't want too. Night Fall 00:59, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The Pupil is as small as it can be. and I blured the ear pink and white. Shruggy talk 16:48, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Can you lighten the whole thing just a tiny bit. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:37, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? Shruggy talk 10:16, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken/add some shading to his back, tail, and the legs farthest from us Night  Fall 04:22, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It did have some, but I made it darker anyway. Shruggy talk 09:37, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, I think the shading looks fine. Blur the white transition on the paws Night  Fall 04:29, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest more. Quailflight 05:21, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur white transitions more. The eye doesn't look right. Make the pupil smaller and make sure there is a white pixel in the eye--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:20, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'll do this tomorrow, and I'm done with blurring the White then! XD JK. Nightshine: there is a white plxel in the eye. And I'll blur the white more then. :) Shruggy talk 01:16, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) - For Approval
There are several discussions so this should be under the limit. Anywho, here is my first elder for PCA. An epic fail, if you ask me. My little depression is meddling with my art skills. =( lol Mo    us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   01:50, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Thicken the stripes and darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 02:06, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

i sorta think the fur at the ear should be stickin up more rather than flat...ish so maybe fix that, other than the tufty ears great job x3bracken- 02:43, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, nice tabby stripes, Mousetalon! Could you make the ear pink a little more triangular? I can hardly see your highlights, so brighten them a bit, and blur the shading on the back and darken all shading, though not too much, particularly near the base of his tail, his forepaws, and under his chin. Good job! Holly dapple  04:51, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The blank didn't give me room to change the ears. Okay, anything else? Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   17:12, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good, Mouse. Blur the shading and highlights some. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 22:08, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred and added some texture to the fur. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   23:17, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes should be lighter. Because on the deputy image, the stripes are gray, here, the stripes are black. I also think they should be thickened more. Icefall Icy Winds 23:19, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I lightened the whole thing. I think, personally, that the stripes are fine. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   15:05, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

It looks too light now. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:21, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! <font color="#7022ff">It's tooHOT!   22:05, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a bit and lighten the stripes a bit. The ear tufts don't look right. Thicken the line art more. Lighten his muzzle-- Night s h i n e   R  22:13, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes won't lighten. Pixlr hates me. =( (I'll try and reupload soon!) ❦✌Mo    us  et  al  on❦✌   !! <font color="#7022ff">It's tooHOT!   04:33, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Can someone lighten the stripes for me? Pixlr is all icky for me right now. And the lineart on the ear tufts is the same thickness as on his deputy image. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! <font color="#7022ff">It's tooHOT!   14:21, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out the ear pink. It looks too bumpy. Blur it. Icefall★ Talk 14:25, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Smoothed out the lineart and blurred it so you wouldn't have to ask. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! <font color="#7022ff">It's tooHOT!   17:53, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anything else I need to do? I might withdraw it so I can reserve a SkC's Destiny charart. . . A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  15:36, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge and blur the ear pink so it looks as if it has depth, and it's not just a wad of pink lying atop the pelt. Then I'd call this ready. Please don't throw this good image away just so you can do another one. It's very well done. 01:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 18:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look black. On his other images, they're lighter. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 03:33, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

As I stated before, I don't really have the tools do do anything about that. Pixlr is dumb. 16:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lightening the stripe will ruin the image... from experience XD Comments before approval? 11:41, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Pikepaw - For Approval


There were lots of convo's so this should be under the limit! :) 1st charart to! Raffyjack123 17:58, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it. Make it a png.It's really nice!  Z  Nightsong 18:00, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Urm...it's not letting me :( Can someone tell me why?? I'm a bit new to this...1st Charart!!!! Raffyjack123 18:09, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Bramble! I made the highlights better to! anything else??? Raffyjack123 22:24, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

When you add the image onto the page, make sure to take out the |thumb in the coding, or else it will show in a gray box, or thumbnail, which we don't want. Other than that this is very well done. I don't see anything wrong with it. Nice job. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 22:35, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ok...sorry Raffyjack123 19:59, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else??? Raffyjack123 18:25, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Relax, it's only been a day. People will comment when they get time. Anyways, make the ear pink bigger and darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 19:06, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Wait...I'm sorry but I know Moontail reserved this first. Sorry.--<font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 04:15, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened shading and added ear-pink :) Any other improvements that could be done???

Blur the ear pink, and make it a bit smaller Night  Fall 04:24, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Really, Moontail rocks reserved this first. I'm sorry, just defending my friend.<font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 04:10, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

So...id it going to be deleted :'( It's my 1st charat :( Raffyjack123 00:42, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

, I'm sorry...Maybe you can use it for another cat? <font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 04:03, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Moontail may have reserved it first but it's no longer on the current projects list. My guess is that her two weeks was up so Raffyjack may keep this. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  14:54, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah never mind.<font color="Orange">Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 01:09, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and more reddish.--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:39, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think the earpink color is fine ,but it does need to be smaller. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  19:26, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I think it should be a tad darker and smaller. ♥Ice shine★  12:37, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading thoroughly. This is very well done. -- 01:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA) for approval
My first charart for PCA. Comments? <font color="purple" style="background:white">The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 14:34, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading along the back a bit. Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 17:28, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

The haunch needs some shading (near front legs) and her chest needs some shading as well (depending on where the light source is) and her scars are a little too straight, perhaps make them curve a little. But she's great for your first charart! 雨 晶須  01:42, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="purple" style="background:white">The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 13:03, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Much better, but just blur the shading on the haunch a little bit. Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 17:12, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

You need to blur the burn shading a bit.  ☼ S u n s p i r i t ☼ 

   ß     20:55, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? <font color="purple" style="background:white">The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 12:38, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

A little more. Hopefully 3rd times the charm! ;) Dawny  18:52, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''<font color="purple" style="background:white">The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 18:17, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading Icefall  Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit pinker (like the color on the mc image) and center it in the ear.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 04:00, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? <font color="purple" style="background:white">The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 16:22, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and add some shading to the herbs Night  Fall 04:34, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail. Icefall★ Talk 13:36, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur the shading more. Better? <font color="purple" style="background:white">The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 16:17, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit thinner ♥Ice  shine★  12:35, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

How can I make it thinner? <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  10:04, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Either with the dodge tool, by lightening it to the color of the fur outside of the shading, or the pencil tool, by drawing over it with the color of the fur outside of the shading.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 14:17, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Are you sure you can't blur the shding more? If so, you could try putting a color that is lighter that the shading but darker than the fur next to the shading and blurring that. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 13:25, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  07:07, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights need to be Blured Rainear   be as silent as rain

The overall shading and highlights need to be thoroughly blurred. They are much too thick and blotchy right now. -- 01:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I re-done the whole image. Comments? <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  12:19, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Haunch hilights need to be blured more Rainear   be as silent as rain

Reuploaded. I blurred the highlights more. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  17:02, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely. Comments before approval? -- 12:31, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight Alt A -- For Approval
Well, she broke her spine as an apprentice. Comments? •Maple fern•  17:20, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, I can barely see it. River star Leader Of StormClan 17:25, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Um there is no Earpink add some  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 17:30, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Above her hind leg there is some brown that needs to be blurred more. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 17:55, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights Cherryfur123  I'm not sweating, I'm melting! 18:11, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

The line art for her back legs isn't very smooth. The back paws need to be fixed and ear pink is needed. Other than that this is fine!--  Night s h i n e    ~  20:27, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Make the lineart more smoother, and I would say to make the legs a tad bigger. Add earpink, and there's a big mob of colour between the midriff. Blend that into the pelt. Icefall★ Talk 13:31, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Briarlight is a hard character to draw, she has one of the hardest injuries. But if anything, add an earpink and make the line art a bit more smooth. It kind of looks like her tail is just there, not attached to her body. Tawny SMEASH 17:04, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out her rump and bring her hind hip forward a bit. But otherwise, very good! :) Also maybe make it look as though her hind paw where resting on the ground.

ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:23, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the right leg (her right) and make the tail thinner. The belly is a little slim, perhaps make it more round. The rest of the charart is great though! 雨晶須 五六七☯☮ 14:45, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Long time no c guys!! For the picture, I can't really tell the diff between her legs and tail. Maybe bend the tip of the tail up a bit to look more like a tail. Do you know what I mean?? -- Rosey Bye Bye School!

Rosetail(A)-for approval
Rosetail's apprentice charart! This is my third charart. Hope this goes well! Comments for approval?

ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:02, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes need to be lightened a lot. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 04:43, June 29, 2010 (UTC)\

Add/darken the shading, lighten the stripes a lot, and make the ear pink bigger. Icefall★ Talk 14:35, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'm on it! :) ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 22:32, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

That look any better? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 23:07, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall★ Talk 00:27, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

'kay ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:16, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

That better? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 20:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and darken the ear pink. Put your signature next to your message, not underneath it--  Night s h i n e    ~  23:09, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Done ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 14:33, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger. Blur the stripes. Darken the tail stripes--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:41, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out the stripes, like, blur them, ♥Ice  shine★  12:33, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry it took so long! :) ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 23:12, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the body stripes a bit and blur the earpink. Ashshadow Ag 03:14, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Done ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 18:44, August 9, 2010 (UTC)


 * Make the eye colour more visible. 11:46, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Foxheart (Alt.D)-For approval
hope you like it (First Real Chartart) Rainear 03:39, June 29, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

Sorry, this will have to be declined, Shimmerpool had him reserved first.  Dawny  03:45, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

No that that users is "Alternative Warrior" mine is "Alternative Deputy" Rainear 03:49, June 29, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

Opps sorry.  Dawny  04:14, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I took him out of thumb nail for you. You should always upload it full size. As for the image, the lineart looks very strange, and it's way too big. What art program do you use? Second, It's not the same color as the deputy image Foxheart already has. This is yellow as apposed to ginger. Third, there's no shading at all Night  Fall 06:15, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks very strange...I would say to layer a deputy image on it. Add shading. The pelt color should be the same as his warrior image. Make the ear pink smaller and darker. Icefall★ Talk 14:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks as if you traced it. Did you? Icefall★ Talk 15:03, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it shows up waaaaaaaaaaaay to big. Like you saved it about three times the normal size of the file. And, it does look like you traced the lineart. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! <font color="#7022ff">It's tooHOT!   15:15, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Also, rename it Foxheart.deputy.alt.png Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   18:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Here:use this and color it in. 雨晶須 五六七☯☮ 02:46, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I used My Paint if you want to know :) -Rainear 19:04, June 30, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

You should use GIMP or Pixlr to do chararts. This is too big. Use this blank:--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine is right. Use one of those programs, and save that blank to your computer. ☽Ice storm★  19:19, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please use GIMP or Pixlr to add shading. Layer over the line art I gave you onto your image--  Night s h i n e    ~  20:27, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I Dont have Gimp or Pixlr all I have that works with the template is Paint. Rainear Med-cat of Riverclan

Okay, first, this needs to be bigger. Right-click the image Nightshine gave you, press, 'open into new tab' and then save that blank. Go to pixlr.com, and open the image. Then, you should probably re-do it/layer the lineart over this image. Then, darken the shading, blur it, make the ear pink smaller, darken it, and blur it. Also addd shading to the front of the haunch, tail, and face. ☽Ice storm★  21:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Also, use a tutorial for the eyes. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   23:37, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Rainear, you don't have to start a new section when you are redoing it. Instead use the old section you put up, then put the image there. 雨晶須 五六七☯☮ 14:41, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I've merged the two sections. Please continue to edit from here. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  21:11, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I haven't read Bluestar's Prophecy at all but, how is Foxheart described in the alternate version? (Time for a trip to the bookstore xD) Quailflight  05:17, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

lol, yes. In the allegiances of Bluestar's Prophecy, she is mistakenly described as a tom. And, in Battles of the Clans, there is a chapter where Foxheart is a tom throughout the entire thing. But I'm pretty sure she's supposed to be a she-cat, especially after reading Secrets of the Clans. The Clan suspected Foxheart as being the secret mother of Brokentail, so you know xD Night  Fall 05:19, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-How is it now? Rainear  be as silent as rain

Add shading. Ashshadow Ag 03:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Added shading Rainear   be as silent as rain

Blur the shading and there is color outside of the line art. Ashshadow Ag 03:23, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blured shading (Hope it's better XD) Rainear   be as silent as rain

Not bad for a beginner, but lets get to business. It can be a tad hard shading when your image has a transparent background so you probably see some gray smudges around him. That came from your work of burning my dear friend. Plus it looks like you ran over his eyes with the burn tool as well with changed his eye color. The coloring is kind of darked than Foxheart's original image so try dodging it or desaturating it some. Which ever you prefer :) Once thats done then you can blur in the shading as it looks a little choppy to me, but that might be my computer.--  Gladiator  Band Geek  05:03, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-Blured Shading even more to make natral fixed eye and It's not darker than the origanal Charart Rainear   be as silent as rain

Is it better or worse? Rainear  be as silent as rain

Reloaded-I know no one mentioned but I looked at the Foxheart page and his eye color is light green so I change the Charart's eye color. Comments? Rainear  be as silent as rain

It has been a day and a half and no one else has commented is it ready to be acepted? Rainear  be as silent as rain

You should wait at least five days, if not a week for asking for comments. As for the image, blur the earpink. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  02:47, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Also, the line art on the jaw looks a bit odd, as if some of it is missing. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  02:48, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-I fixed jaw lineart and I blured/redone the ear pink. Comments? Rainear  be as silent as rain

Oh! I added some shading/highlights on his face. Any Comments/suggestions? Rainear  be as silent as rain

This has an unusual texture that I don't normally see, and it's very pretty. You did a nice job. =) There are a couple of things though; the front foreleg's shading's transition is too hard; blur it and add some more shading down the leg. Add darker shading to the hind paws, as those would be in shadow. Add a little more shading down the tail and blur the existing shading slightly. Off image critique now; I moved the image to the top of the section; please keep it there so it's in a consistent spot. Also, you seem to be only typing three tildes instead of four; please type four so the timestamp will be there as well as the signature. -- 12:19, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded-I did what you said bramble and sorry about the tail I did what you asked but I think I blured the transaction too much Rainear   be as silent as rain  15:31, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkheart Alt (MC) For Approval
Comments? Moon Talk 15:08, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur the patch on his neck a bit.  Dawny  17:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is that? Moon Talk 17:55, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the herbs. They're a bit bright right now. Lighten the ear pink--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:42, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Mõŏń    ۞   13:01, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

I would say to blur the patch near his jaw/chest area. This is really good! ♥Ice shine★  13:03, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is GREAT! I'd just say to darken the herb farthest from us, because it's kinda similar to the second herb, but otherwise, brilliant! S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 09:50, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

...???... What? Mõŏń    ۞   14:12, August 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * I think the herbs look fine... they don't have to be different colours. Comments before approval? 11:56, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Pouncetail (Alt A) For Approval
Aw, first Rowanclaw, now Pouncetail. Poor guy xP Okay, here's Pouncetail as he (or she) was portrayed in The Sight Night  Fall 20:44, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think you could afford to make the ear pink a little bigger. Other than that, this looks great! <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 18:53, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * sigh* so many alternate images...O.O it's killing me. This is great, just make the ear pink bigger and blur the stripes. ♥Ice  shine★  20:52, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes

Morningflower (A) - For Approval
Morningflower as an apprentice; not very happy about the way she came out...anyways comments? <font color="Cyan" style="background:black">Ðαωηlεαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 02:11, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

It looks very good! I suggest adding more brown patches. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:20, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Added more patches. <font color="Cyan" style="background:black">Ðαωηlεαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 03:21, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches more--  Night s h i n e    ~  03:27, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred it.<font color="Cyan" style="background:black">Ðαωηlεαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 05:23, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. Darken the shading, I cannot see it very well. ♥Ice shine★  15:02, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading. <font color="Cyan" style="background:black">Ðαωηlεαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 19:14, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Center the ear pink a little. <font color="Gold" style="background:Green">Cherryfur123 Home + work should never be together! 21:06, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks! Fixed the ear pink.Anything else? <font color="Cyan" style="background:white">Ðαώήlέαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 21:33, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add some patches to the tail. ♥Ice shine★  12:22, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Added patches to the tail.  Dawny  19:54, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's looking good, Dawnleaf! Just add some of those yellowish colored spots that her other images have to make it look more like them. ;) <font color="Gold" style="background:Green">Cherryfur123 Home + work should never be together! 22:29, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty! Do what Cherryfur said about the tan splotches, but also work on earpink; it looks like one of the brown smudges to me. Could you make it more of a pale pink, bigger, and more blurred? Holly dapple  04:54, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Urh... This looks good, but I already reserved it. I couldn't work on it because of my exams, but Insane said that it was ok.... I'm confused and a little bit annoyed. <span style="font-family:verdana; color:Thistle; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:none;">ωiſdɦɛɑrŧ 05:29, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wildheart: You should have posted something here so we would all know. We would've given you a bit more time. As for the image it's very good. Just do what Cherryfur and Hollydapple said. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  17:52, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this image, Wildheart, if you would still like to you can take over. Dawny  19:56, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnleaf: Aw, no! You don't have to do that! Yours is way better than mine is, anyways. Keep on working on it, and next time something like this happens, I'll just post something up here about being delayed.

Ashshadow: Insane told me to put a note in the table where I reserved Morningflower's apprentice pic, and I did so, but apparently somebody deleted it. I'll post something here next time. Hopefully there WILL be no next time :P <span style="font-family:verdana; color:Thistle; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:none;">ωiſdɦɛɑrŧ 23:01, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

I did see that note about the time I was looking for a cat to (before Hawkheart). As an extra suggestion on improving the image, Dawnleaf, the shoulder highlight is a little too low. Make it a little higher. Three cheers for the red, white, and blue!  23:21, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, I don't want to do her anymore, someone else can take over, from where I left off. Dawny  01:57, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

If i cant do Ivytails (Alt) version i will do this (wait how do i edit it i save it and put it on my pixlr right? oh well i will learn.)  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 13:44, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh NVM if its ok with everyone can i do this  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 22:56, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Wildheart's doing it. (?) ♥Ice  shine★  22:58, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thats wierd its crossed out like this

Wildheart Morningflower (A)

thats what it says  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 23:06, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw is right, I checked. Why is does it have a strike-through through it? Has Wildheart decided to not do Morningflower? I'm confused. The same thing happened before, didn't it? I can't remember...I'm a little sleepy, and my cat (Gertie) is trying to get my attention by biting my foot and being the cutest darn thing. Holly dapple  03:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can we decide whether anyone is going to do this as I am confused as to whether to archive this as withdrawn or not -- Sandy star 18:01, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, I'll finish it. No sense letting a nice image go to waste over literally nothing. I'll tweak it a bit and put it back up. I seem to attract Morningflower images. =D -- 01:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you Bramble; and yes you do XD (Not to mention I failed in my goal to do all her images - I got bored lol). The main issue with this I think is consistency with her exisiting images; just the colours used are not quite the same. [I'd also like to note that the past tense of 'withdraw' is 'withdrawn' rather than 'withdrawed' for whoever wrote that - it's not important who] 11:59, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Well, here's Hawkheart. I like him about as much as I like Thistleclaw. (I. Am. Not. A. Hawkheart. Fan.) Still, I thought he'd be fun to do. All character art is fun to do! Hawkheart was a bit of a challenge, which made it even more fun. Gotta go see the coverart for The Sign of the Moon (I saw it while I was uploading)! Yay! So, comments? I'm kind of happy with how he turned out. :) Holly  dapple  04:19, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, but we've got to figure out which style we're going to use, yours, or Moonpelt's. Personally, I prefer Moonpelt's, it looks more flecked. But that's just me Night  Fall 04:38, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Nightfall. I know my Hawkheart doesn't look like Moonpelt's. I was thinking about how I was going to do Hawkheart for atleast four days. I really liked his/her style too, but I just can't smudge it in that cool way. I tried, but it looked horrific. I am not joking. I can't make it smudged without messing it up. Holly dapple  04:51, July 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Well if we're using yours, lets blur in the flecks some more please :) I can see a bit of sharp edges in some a little. They are like REALLY sharp, but they're very defined and kind of make it stick out.-- Cchslogo.gif Gladiator  Band Geek Treble_and_bass_clef_heart.png 05:06, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded. All spots blurred with Photoshop Elements, Shimmerpool. Did I get what you meant? I saw it on the throat patch particularly. Man, I'm sleepy. But TW is over, so I can get back to work! Yay! Anyway, if there are any other areas in particular that look weird, let me know, please. Holly  dapple  06:06, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

This looks nice. I have two small suggestions: the ear pink is a little big and is almost falling out of his ear. And the highlight on the shoulder, as well as the spots could do with some more blending. Perhaps try using the smudge tool a little on the spots and then blending. It takes some getting used to but looks good. 12:05, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (W) - For Approval
I counted about five times, and since discussions and withdrawn images don't count towards image numbers, this should be under the limit. If it's over the limit and I just fail, let me know. Sorry I haven't been on as much these past two weeks, I know I've hardly been on at all, but I've had Band Camp everyday for almost all day the first week and still a large portion of my day the second week. I'll try to make up for it this next week, but after that school starts up again...woot. My excuses aside, I don't know why, but I love the name Plumwillow. I like the ending willow a lot (not as much as throat, of course :P), and the prefix plum is pretty cool, too. I also think that Rabbitleap is an awesome name, and that SkyClan's Destiny was epic. :)

And now things image wise, I feel that I've lost some of my talent for chararts, and that this isn't very good. I'm not sure if I got this dark enough for dark gray. Comments and suggestions?  I  c y   :)  I  s e e  smile ! 03:56, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Looks nice! But you should make the shading a bit darker Rainear   be as silent as rain

Blur the earpink and darken the highlights a bit. Ashshadow Ag 14:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Expand the highlights- they're too concentrated. A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!   16:23, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened some of the shading, I darkened the highlights (which made them less concentrated), and I blurred the ear pink. I knew that it would kill me. Comments? 16:51, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 12:06, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Foxheart (Alt. W) - For Approval


Well I think I got the colors right for this one and I counted right so it should be under the limit...unless someone beat me while I was uploading this x] Here's Foxheart as a male :3 Commentsto let me know because I think I might have to darken the image.--  Gladiator  Band Geek  04:42, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

You did WAY!! better than me. XD (Foxheart Alt D) I think it looks awesome!! :D Rainear   be as silent as rain

Good! blur the highlights. S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 09:32, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Dawnleaf 19:22, August 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated my updates shall come at a slower rate now that school started for me today.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:41, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - For Approval
I counted and this was the 35th, and this is Waspwhisker. Any comments/critisism for him? S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 08:15, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded: Fixed blurred lineart around body S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 08:15, August 7, 2010 (UTC) '''

This is great! Blur it a little more, though. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 12:12, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Ashshadow Ag 13:37, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

The patches are unevenly blurred, A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  15:37, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded: Fixed up some of the patches, I don't know about the shape, but I blurred and darkened the shading. S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 22:24, August 7, 2010 (UTC)'''

Theres blurred line-art on the back, and the ear pink needs to be blurred a bit. Also darken the shading, otherwise this is pretty good :) Dawnleaf  22:27, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded: I tried to darken the shading, do you mean to burn it so it gets darkened? Thats what I mostly did, I blurred the shading and fixed the blurred lineart. Can someone do the scar for me? pixlr is all fuzzy for me right now. S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 06:24, August 8, 2010 (UTC)'''

Dude, the scar I drew was bad, but I added the scar for you Sunny. Hope this is good enough Earth  bender Tawny Style! 17:27, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded: Thanks Tawny, It's great. Comments? S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 05:13, August 9, 2010 (UTC)'''

Your berry welcome Sunny. ;P So far, its looking great. Myself, I can't see anything wrong. But maybe...theres a patch near the ear pink. Blur the gray part just a TAD more. Earth bender Tawny Style! 12:55, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Honestly, the scar kooks unrealistic. It's unevenly blurred, like before. 16:00, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if this really matters, but isn't his pattern a little. . . far fetched? I thought he would just be gray with white markings. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 20:24, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

If it is bad, I can honestly start it again, if the scar's unrealistic. But Thats up to you guys. Should I just start him again??? S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 21:53, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the scar you guys, Sunny, I have an original version of Waspwhisker without the scar if you like. But if you have a version,...then you know... Earth bender Tawny Style! 22:20, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the pattern is a little unlikely (but what do I know of cat genetics?) and perhaps starting over would be a good idea. Persevere though because this is almost there and your second try will be infinitely better than your first. I haven't read SD so I don't know where the scar should be, but having it drag over his flank, midsection and chest area seems a little... well not quite realistic. 12:08, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (W)- For Approval
Since I'm withdrawing my Wetfoot image, I think this should be under the limit. But, anyways, here's Nettlesplash. I had a little trouble with the shading and all. Comments? <font color="Gold" style="background:Black">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In stores worldwide 10:47, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good:) Blur the shading more. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 12:09, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred as much as I could. The blur tool hates me for some reason xD. What else? <font color="Gold" style="background:Black">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In stores worldwide 13:04, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to be a bother, but blur the back shading a bit more. Also, blur the earpink. Earth bender Tawny Style! 14:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the eye a bit. Ashshadow Ag 14:03, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the shading (think I messed it up D:) and the ear pink. And I lightened the eye. Is it better? <font color="Gold" style="background:Black">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In stores worldwide 15:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head, and chest, and blur the ear pink a tad. Dawnleaf 19:20, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a little reddish, but I don't know if that's really a problem. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 22:31, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? <font color="Gold" style="background:Black">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In stores worldwide 22:42, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the head, and the shading on the back is a little thick. Dawnleaf 22:44, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Gold" style="background:Black">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In stores worldwide 23:05, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head, and back, it's still too thick. Blur the highlights S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 06:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm probably gonna have to blur the shading again >:( <font color="Gold" style="background:Black">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In stores worldwide 12:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

What should I do next? <font color="Gold" style="background:Black">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> In stores worldwide 14:59, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks nice! Earth bender Tawny Style! 15:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should try making the colour more like the colour on Fallowfern's queen image that's up for approval. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 20:22, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, I tried but now it looks like the shading needs blurring again >:(. Yeah, so what'd you guys think? 20:36, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Frecklewish - For Approval
Ha ha, I epically FAILED on the spotted legs!!! Anyways, My first Charart!! Comments? River  storm 13:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty good for your first charat, but it's tweak week and I think that only warriors are able to put up characts. (I may be wrong, but I read the guidelines for tweak week twice, I may be mistaken). As for the picture, there is something wrong in the chest area (not sure what) and the medicine needs to be more blended together. Like it's too light, then it just turns dark. Frostheart ♥  20:01, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Tweak week is over. Image wise; define the spots and darken the shading.Its very good for your first charart though :) Dawnleaf  20:21, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

She could use some stripes. She is a mottled tabby, after all. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 22:42, August 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * Unless those dark brown bits are the stripes, and I'm just blind. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 01:56, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:'' I fixed the herbs, darkened the shading, and added stripes. River  storm 15:42, August 8, 2010 (UTC)''

Define the spots a bit more. This is way better than my first charart! Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:13, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: ''I defined the spots a bit more. River  storm 17:24, August 9, 2010 (UTC)''

Onion(Ro)-For approval
Second charart! this is like a fail though... Mossy   I fight to live I live to fight!

Looks good! I think you should make the silver parts darker, though. They look very pale gray- almost white. And maybe make the ear pink bigger. It's a little small. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 22:27, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED :3 did what you said Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!

Good! Sharpen the black patches. (If you use pixlr, I'm not sure if they have an option to do that but they should) <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 22:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED okey dokey x3 Mossy   I fight to live I live to fight!

Lighten the ear pink and lighten the shading on the paws, otherwise, very nice! S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED done :) anything else? Mossy   I fight to live I live to fight!

Make the ear pink more trianglular. 19:20, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed :) anything else? Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  13:56, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you could afford to sharpen the patches some more. They're a little too blurred. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 20:16, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Billystorm (W) - For Approval
Billystorm as a warrior. Comments? Dawnleaf 22:14, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great!! The only thing I see wrong with it is that the ear pink is hard to see. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 22:28, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Fixed earpink, better? Dawnleaf 22:49, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Mmm, It's still a little hard to see. Just a bit. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 22:50, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Better? Dawnleaf 23:01, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Way better :) Rainear   be as silent as rain

Smudge and blur all the white transitions, as they're a bit solid looking right now. Other than that this is wonderful. -- 01:14, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks Bramble. Blurred and smudged the white transitioning. Better? Dawnleaf 02:33, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome Dawny! Make the war pink a little more triangular. S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the eyes, they're very, very dark. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 08:11, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

He should be more of an orange color. Right now he's brown. Darkhallows... Mew? 18:04, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Made the ear pink more trianglular, and fixed the eyes and pelt colour. Dawnleaf 19:47, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights on his back look a bit thick Rainear   be as silent as rain

There are no highlights ;) 19:59, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Opps I meant shading Rainear   be as silent as rain

Personally, I think the shading looks fine. Anything else? 20:24, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Bouncefire (W) ~For Approval
Okay I made him using the same exact color as his apprentice image. Comments? Tiger X Amber We see Heart to Heart 00:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good but you should make the ear pink smaller Rainear   be as silent as rain

The shading on his neck goes all the way around his neck. It looks funny. Also, shade the bottom of the muzzle. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 00:21, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch, add more shading to his forelegs. 雨晶須 夏天來了! 01:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but blur the shading on the haunch a bit more. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 11:29, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Okay I made the ear pink smaller, fixed the shading around his neck, shaded the bottom of his muzzle and blurred the haunch as much as it could go. Anything else? Tiger X Amber We see Heart to Heart 14:18, August 8, 2010

Lighten the ear pink a bit more. Like always, very impressive River! XD S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 05:15, August 9, 2010 (UTC)(UTC)

He still needs more shading on the bottom of his muzzle. Also, add some shading to the bottom of his ear. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 05:58, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I added more shading to the bottom of his muzzle, and added shading to the bottom of his ear, but do you think I should still change the color of the earpink? I mean it matches the same color as his apprentice image. Oh and thanks Sunspirit! Tiger X Amber We see Heart to Heart 23:11, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 12:14, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Frecklewish (A) - For Approval
Here you go. A terrible Frecklepaw. Yay. :3 Construcments? ♥Ice storm★  01:15, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are rather hard to see. Darken them a bit. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 01:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are too light, darken the shading. S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and highlights. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 11:46, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, i thought I had Frecklewish up for approval. I reserved it before you and had it up for approval before you...... River   storm 14:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

No Riverstorm you have her as a Medicine cat apprentice this is her as a regular apprentice.As for the image define the stripes more other than that its wonderful :) Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!

OMG I'm so sorry Icestorm! *hits self on head* I must be going blind!! Anyways, as an apology gift, I'll tell you what to do...I agree with Mossy, i'd say just define the stripes. River  storm 15:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back leg farthest from up :) 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The mottle spots sort of look whitish. I think you could afford to make them darker. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 21:35, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Fallowfern (Q) - For Approval
I had a hard time getting the shading to be blurred enough. Comments? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 02:23, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! I can find like, no fault with this. Although I don't think you coloured the nose. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 05:03, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Brown cats have brown noses. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 05:04, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I've seen lots of brown cats with pink noses. If tabbies count, my friend has two and also there are plenty of pictures of brown cats on the internet with pink noses. But if you're keeping it brown, shouldn't it at least be darker? <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 05:13, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Go to google images, search brown cat, and look at any of the results that aren't tabbies or have white around their noses. :) I guess it could be darker, though. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 05:22, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I guess you're right, but their noses are pink- ish. Not that it really matters, but if you leave it the way it is people will think you just didn't bother to colour the nose x3 <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 08:08, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Technically, I did color it (gave it its own highlight and shading), but I made it dark, so now the highlight is about the same as the fur's base color. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 08:19, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but maybe you should blur the highlights more. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 11:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

How's this? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 17:21, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Ashshadow Ag 17:24, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any better? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 17:38, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Very good. The earpink looks too...blurred I don't know how to put it. Like it should take up more of the ear. But it my just be my mac... Earth  bender Tawny Style! 17:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw (KP) For Approval
Here's my 1st charart. It's Ebonyclaw as a kittypet. Comments? Dovesong Dove's gentle song. 12:35, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good for your first charart:) Make the nose and ear pink more pinkish and blur the highlights a tad. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö      14:42, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Very nice. Ashshadow Ag 14:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink seems a bit dark, and I see white as an outline for it. Blur the shading/highlights more. Frostheart ♥  18:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome. The earpink is...too pink. It should be a reddish color. 18:08, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good! But yes, the ear pink is too pink and there's some white pixels around it. Also, blur the shading xD 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks purplish. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 05:59, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Thistle">♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  12:08, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is your first Charart?!? :O OMG this is better than mine! Anywyas, the only thing I can say is to blur the back shading...and the earpink looks kinda wierd. Try using the coding: (#) 973735 and use it for the earpink. That's what I used for Rockshade.(my character up for approval) Earth  bender Tawny Style! 13:01, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and shading. Anything else? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Thistle">♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  14:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Much Better!! For now, I don't have anything to say. This is excellent. Earth bender Tawny Style! 17:02, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, blur the highlights on the back and tail. Otherwise, it's really awesome. xD Frostheart  ♥  19:13, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured shading more. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Thistle">♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪   21:58, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

First charart? This is very good. Comments before approval? 12:17, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you should darken the entire image. Run over it with the burn tool, I suppose. Also, you could add some shading and highlights to the collar. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 20:14, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Nutmeg - For Approval
There are three discussions, so this is under the limit. I like how this one came out:) Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö      14:39, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, maybe you could blur the shading a bit more. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:Turqoise">Tansyfoot. 15:14, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Great job, Hawk! I would say to lighten the white tail tip. 18:06, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad bit. Otherwise, this is really awesome. How do you get the smudge tool to work so well? I fail every time. DX 18:24, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the shading, lightened the tail taip, and defined the ear pink. And Icethroat, I blurred the patches first, smudged them them with a three pixel brush, then smudged them again with a one pixel brush. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 01:07, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Whatever you did works Hawk as this looks amazing =) Comments before approval? 12:19, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rockshade (W) - For Approval
Fail, fail, EPIC FAIL!! I am NEVER doing a black cat again...ha ha they are unlucky. I know the highlights on the shoulder are too noticeable, but if I blur them anymore, then the color goes missing because photoshops blurring is too strong. So...comments? Earth bender Tawny Style! 15:25, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Use a darker color for the highlight then you should use Pixler.com or Gimp although I use nether, I use My Paint but I alway have to remake the background to make it transparent Rainear   be as silent as rain  17:49, August 8,2010

Blur the shading, make the highlights darker. The shading is also lumpy and seems exactly black to me. Make the highlights smaller. Frostheart ♥  17:59, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I fixed the highlights, shading, and I lightened it. Suggestions? Earth bender Tawny Style! 18:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 19:08, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are basically taking over the complete picture now. Just redo the paint, add some shading as you would. Blur, then just midtones in highlights, and click once or twice. Make sure it's not bigger than size 50. Frostheart ♥  19:47, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

He looks dark gray...I suggest making the image darker. Dawnleaf 19:53, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I realized that something changed in the pixlr highlighter, so get rid of the highlights, redo the shading and choose a slightly lighter color for the highlight, choose size 50 and just pretend thats the highlight. ^^ Frostheart  ♥  22:07, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED:Frostheart, I use photoshop, not pixlr. (I only use it to delete the white part). Anyways, I darkened the image,fixed the highlights. Suggestions? Earth bender Tawny Style! 22:30, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights smaller and make the shading noticeable in the leg area. Frostheart ♥  02:37, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I made the shading a bit more noticable, but I epically FAILED on the making it smaller part. ;P Suggestions? Earth bender Tawny Style! 13:52, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

It's much better now. Just even out the shading on the hind leg. That's it. xD Frostheart  ♥  19:12, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED: I fixed the shading on the hind leg. Suggestons? Earth bender Tawny Style! 22:08, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Joining
Hi, I'm Lilyflame and I want to join Project Character Art as an apprentice. Can I? Thanks :) <font color="#FF2727" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:#ffffff">★ Lilyflame ★ 20:45, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Lilyflame! A lead will add you in soon, but for now, if you have any questions, feel free to ask! Earth bender Tawny Style! 23:56, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Of course, Lilyflame. I'll add you in right away. These links can help you: here and here. Thanks for your interest in joining! -- 04:01, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W) - For Approval
With 4 discussions and 1 withdrawed, this should be under the limit. Sorry if the highlights are noticeable, somethings wrong with the pixlr highlighter right now. Frostheart ♥  22:06, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

He needs more shading and some highlights. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 22:25, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. Darken the shading some more. -- Dawnleaf 22:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add or brighten the highlights on his haunch and shoulder. Darken the shading, and add an earpink. Earth bender Tawny Style! 22:42, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add some ear pink 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Updated. I made the shading more noticeable. I tried to make the highlights more noticeable, but if I do, it looks splotched and glitchy like this.

Can someone do it for me? Frostheart ♥  02:33, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'll add the shading for you Frostheart :) Rainear   be as silent as rain

There are two images, both with different names. Rename one of these Pineclaw.warrior.png, and put it at the top. If you keep reuploading it, it will change automatically so you don't have to keep adding the image over and over again.

As for constructments, blur the ear pink. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  02:53, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

How is the shading on this Frostheart. hope it's good Rainear   be as silent as rain

Blur the earpink a bit more. Question, Frostheart, was this done in GIMP or pixlr or photoshop or My Paint or something like that? Earth bender Tawny Style! 12:58, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr. And it's great Rainear, thanks! Frostheart ♥  15:51, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Because I myself know that Pixlr doesn't have a strong blurring. (I did my VERY first charart with Pixlr). Anyways, just blur the earpink like I said above. Earth bender Tawny Style! 17:01, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to blur the ear-pink. Frostheart ♥  19:10, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I brought up the image in photoshop and I noticed a few things:


 * There's some color that goes out of the lineart (make the background a solid color, like yellow to be able to see.

I'd help blur the earpink, but the version saved is a PNG and I can't do it without blurring the lineart :( anyways, hope this helps! Earth  bender Tawny Style! 22:16, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * The following lineart is blurred:
 * The background should be transparent, but is white (that might just be photoshop, but whatevs)

Alright, I fixed the blurred line-art the best I could, and I fixed the color outside. Frostheart ♥  23:56, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) - For Approval
Eh. Comments? Geor ge 00:04, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Define ear pink and make ear pink slightly larger Rainear   be as silent as rain

This looks very nice, but the ear pink is gray and very small. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ 00:30, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is this over the limit?  Sand  It's not your fault Texas 01:34, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, there are five discussions and one withdrawn image.

Anyway, darken the stripes a bit. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 01:56, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and pinker. Frostheart ♥  02:35, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This good darken the ear pink a little and make it tad bigger and darken the tabby stripes a little Honeyfeather 07:35, August 9, 2010 (UTC)Honeyfeather

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Geor ge 13:25, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is sort of a gray color right now, make it pinker or redder. 14:11, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

He looks more patched than tabby. Perhaps define the stripes more.. 23:29, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Frostclaw (KP) - For Approval
This is the 34th image. I am pleased with how she turned out. Comments? Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  18:44, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks semi pale gray almost whitish and make the ear pink go up higher Rainear   be as silent as rain

If I lighten her, it will look too unnatural. I'll fix the ear pink though. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  19:01, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This looks almost silver. Make it whiter. lighten the shading on the forearm, and define the earpink. Frostheart ♥  19:03, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I fixed the ear pink. I'll fix the shading and color later today. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  19:07, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I lightened the entire image. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  15:21, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiny bit more noticeable. Frostheart ♥  17:16, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Much better! Just make the ear pink bigger. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 20:11, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

GraystripeMegaFan160 - JOIN REQUEST
Hello, I'm GraystripeMegaFan160 and I'd really like to join Project CharArt. Bramble gave me a link to the guidlines, which I have read. To tell the truth, I really want to join because I love the way the CharArts look on the cat pages, and I know I'd really enjoy making them. I've done a few, which you can see on my userpage, if you'd like, but overall they aren't very good. I have the photo colouring software GIMP. Please let me know whether I am accepted into the project.

♦ Graystripe ♦ I love you, Silverstream... 19:26, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

P.S: Does becoming an apprentice of this Project mean I have to be apprenticed to a user? Because I don't know if I understand that... ^^;

Awesome. xD A senior warrior will add you soon. And being an apprentice of this project doesn't mean you need to have a mentor. You can, I think. But it's optional. You just read the guidelines and do your best. Frostheart ♥  19:52, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes you don't need a mentor but I suggest you look at the apprentice tutorials on the main page, both eye and shading Rainear   be as silent as rain

Join request!
Hi! I'm Sunfrost, and I would like to help out! There are tons of people joining! I'd love to help! Sunfrost 22:12, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sure you can join! I'll wait for a senior warrior to put you in, but welcome! You'll have so much fun! =) Tiger X Amber We see Heart to Heart 22:57, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Erm, hi, I can't think of a subject...
Cuz I sorta want to join,but sorta not...I mean my first charart (at the bottom) was ok, I guess... then again the computer is clogged...so I'd probably upload them, then delete the file on my computer...well now that I said that I guess I wanna join. XD

My charart:



<font color="Green" font face="Papyrus" "background:gray; border:3px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Zor <font color="blue" font face="Papyrus" "background:black; border:1px dashed -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">th Highly   Explosive  02:15, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's very nice, but this is a project for Canon-Characters only. If you wanted to upload this charart to your profile, it doesn't need to be approved. ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 16:41, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

That was used as an example. So I want to join, anyway.

<font color="Green" font face="Papyrus" "background:gray; border:3px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Zor <font color="blue" font face="Papyrus" "background:black; border:1px dashed -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">th Highly   Explosive  20:20, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Macgyver (KP)-For Approval
Comments? 02:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's really good. Make the ear lighter, or darken the ear. xD Frostheart  ♥  02:23, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Are you talking about the earpink? 02:46, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. Hehe. Lighten the earpink slightly, or darken the nose. xD Frostheart  ♥  15:04, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink and nose don't have to be the same color. . . 15:10, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

I know. But something seems weird about the balance. (may just be the lighting in my room. xD) Frostheart  ♥  16:43, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Coal (W) - For Approval
Coal as a warrior. I didn't know he was even seen as one, but it said so on his page. I don't think this is over the limit, but I may have miscounted. Hopefully not! <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 03:27, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Also, are you allowed to reserve something in current projects when you have something else up for approval? Just wondering, because I want to reserve Snooky KP. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 03:52, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, you can't reserve anything until this is approved or you withdraw.

Darken the shading. -- 04:26, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Done. Did I darken it enough? <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 04:53, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

There's color outside the lineart. 12:52, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rawr! Again? The one bad thing about GIMP. I always colour outside the lineart and fail to see it because of the grey checkered background. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 19:57, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing, as always Moss. Just darken the shading on the front side of the body. 20:00, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! '''Done, and done! Ha ha, there might still be colour outside the lineart because I erased the extra colour, and then Icestorm told me to darken shading, so more might have ended up on the outside, but I don't have very good eyes and I erased what I saw but there might be more. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 20:08, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Current Projects
Hi. Can someone add me to current projects? I would like to reserve Egg as a loner. <font color="981f1f" style="background:Gold">Breezestar <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> Only a Breeze... 03:29, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Done :) Rainear   be as silent as rain

Egg (Lo) up for Approval
So here it is. It's my first one, so I know it's not that great, but what do you think? <font color="981f1f" style="background:Gold">Breezestar <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> Only a Breeze... 04:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

You're gonna have to redo it - it needs to be a png file. -- 04:27, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

I changed it <font color="981f1f" style="background:Gold">Breezestar <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> Only a Breeze... 04:43, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it. It looks pixelly. You can fix that by blurring the parts that are pixelly. Also, he has no eye colour. De-saturate it a bit, too. He looks too yellow right now. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ mosspool ♫ <font color="#26B1C8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:white;"> the new dovesong! 04:50, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it File:Egg.loner.png. Moon flight  Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ  15:11, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good for your first image. :3 I would say what the others said, and darken the shading some. ;)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 16:51, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) - for approval


My first cat. I don't know about it... 15:43, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Plumwillow.apprentice.png and blur the earpink.Also, I'm pretty sure this is over the limit.-- . Silverstar  . talk  15:50, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good and like silverstar said blur the pink ear XXRainfeatherXx 15:54, August 10, 2010 (UTC)Honeyfeather

I think it's blurred enough, but the corner is touching the ear, make it shaped and make it lighter. Frostheart ♥  17:14, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too pink. Make it a bit darker. It's amazing for your first cat! <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  17:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)