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Diesel (Lo) ~ For Approval
Geez this was hard. Also will upload later to tweak shading.

On the kp (i know it's not approved yet, but it was the first one uploaded) the stripes on the body and tail are pointed the other direction.

i think the stomach shading is leaking near the front leg 05:06, 9/20/2017

If the kittypet was uploaded first, shouldn't this be short furred as well? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 05:35, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Star had no way of knowing that Broken would have her image be short furred. Give her a bit of time to fix things up to match, it hasn't been long since she uploaded. I'm not trying to be mean in any way, just trying to explain why it's going down like this.

Broken's is posted first, therefore she holds the master pattern claim here. All Star would really need to do is change the pelt length anyways. Everything else looks pretty good to me, in terms of matching. He is in fact shown with the shorter fur (compared to Graystripe, who has long fur), hence why I added it to his description.

the haunch stripes don't really match. i know its a different angle, but i think its missing a stripe or two. see here http://vvcap.com/oRLXOjslnEm 03:12, 9/21/2017

I think the top stripe on the --> front leg should be a bit smaller. And sharpen both stripes on the front leg. 13:11, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Sorry for the wait! I got swamped in schoolwork and stuff.

the thicker stripe on the ---> front leg needs to stretch up the arm further. 06:15, 9/22/2017

re-up

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us? 00:58, September 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail please. --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:11, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

re-up eh.

Maybe recede the shading on all of the paws just a touch, so we can see the real color underneath? The whole paw seems shaded on all of them, making them all look kinda gray. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:20, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Little Mew (Ki) ~ For Approval
20:20, 9/27/2017

I'm not sure if it's supposed to be like that, but could you define the light on the back paw? --ErmineGlow (talk) 23:20, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

its supposed to be like that 23:21, 9/27/2017

Define the belly shading a bit? 12:15, September 28, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. 18:31, 9/28/2017

Recede the shading on the right (our right) shoulder a bit, with it being all in shadow it looks kinda flat. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:34, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. 19:41, 10/01/2017

Growler (KP) - For Approval
idk man, as I said when I edited PCA's reservation table, if someone has an issue with me re-reserving it with a new date, I'll address that and use the original date (the 17th) instead. Regardless, I did wait a few days to see if someone would claim it, and they didn't.

Great work, old friend :) Perhaps add the tiniest bit of shading to the back, the whiteness is pretty bright. Ah, maybe do some blurring to the patches as well? 02:00, September 29, 2017 (UTC)

i dont think Snowed would need to soften the white patches. they seem as sharp as the rogue's, which came first in the set. 18:17, 9/29/2017

I think some of the shading is leaking on the white head fluff? 02:19, September 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not sure what to do about the back, since I don't think the source I'm using has shading there? Plus, it's pure white, as with all of my black-and-white cats... I think it only looks duller on the rogue because of the shading and how thick it is on there.

Define the shading on the front leg a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:41, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Flamenose (W) ~ For Approval
wanted to get this up since the reds are apparently alts, and I am aware of the name. 19:01, September 28, 2017 (UTC)

There appears to be white on the face and tail. If it is meant to be pale parts, can you make it more ginger?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  04:54, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

It doesn't look white to me, Stealth. There are other images with almost this exact same coloring. ALSO I finally got unlazy and renamed this and Flamenose's other images so here you go.

If the white on Tawnypelt is acceptable as "cream", then this is fine. 16:04 Sun Oct 1

reuploaded tweaks 16:30, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the front leg. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:42, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs closest to us. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 23:59, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Flamenose (Star) - For Approval
I really wish I could get this tablet to work on photoshop. <span style="">16:02 Sun Oct 1

Define/darken the shading a bit? I'm having a rough time seeing any of it, really.

Reuploaded This was hell to shade in general. And I can't smudge or blur anything on SAI2 so this was hand drawn and why its rough. <span style="">16:07 Sun Oct 1

The roughness is fine, honestly. It's no rougher than David's image. I just genuinely couldn't see the shading. I can see it now, though. =P

the stripes on the body are meant to be more classic style stripes, might be my fault bexcause of the shading and whatever on the warrior though 16:18, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading again? --ErmineGlow (talk) 16:29, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Its on 100% opacity already, but I'll try. <span style="">16:31 Sun Oct 1

The shading is also leaking away from the lineart slightly behind the shoulder < way and at the base of the chest and < arm a little.

Define the shading on the right shoulder/leg. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:43, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading altogether with a different layer setting that I am still getting used to. <span style="">23:50 Sun Oct 1

You did a beautiful job with the shading, Sun! Smooth it out a smidge? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 23:58, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks, Cosmo! I will see what I can do in terms of smoothing it. This program is awful in that respect compared to photoshop lol. <span style="">00:03 Mon Oct 2

Pad (Ki) ~ For Approval
Eh. If there is any problems on reserving, I reserved this on Friday. But if someone reserved it sooner, that's fine :P 20:08, October 2, 2017 (UTC)

I don't believe that this can have texture. If manga alts aren't allowed to have texture, I don't see why these should be any different. 20:18, October 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 20:23, October 2, 2017 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just my screen but the pale parts look a little green? Perhaps define them as well. 22:23, October 2, 2017 (UTC)

Is the shading or the pink parts be that pink? Or is it like shading or lighting? But it looks way too pink. Maybe saturate down a bit. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:24, October 3, 2017 (UTC)

Forgive me if this is moot, but the colors need to match Husker and Little Mew, and I can't tell if they match or not (again apologies if they do). 01:28, October 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Nah, you were right Vec. 01:33, October 3, 2017 (UTC)

can u dull the highlights, they're throwing the color off <span style="">01:36, 10/03/2017