Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 2

Rainwhisker - Declined
I did this one for Rainwhisker. Hope you guys like it. Eaglebranch 14:42, 2 August 2008 (UTC)


 * I like it, Eagle(can i call you that?), but Rainwhisker is kind of a darker gray than this shade. But other than that, the shading's good and he rocks! --Bramble 15:05, 2 August 2008 (UTC)


 * First off, the character is dark, rather than mediume gray so the shade will need to adjusted. Then there's the shading, which is in need of a bit of work. The character still looks very flat and the edges of the shaded areas are very very distinct rather than blended as they should be. It's a nice start, but needs some work.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 15:12, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Kitsu's right about the shading and color, but I think you did a great job on the fur! GB (Grocery store) 15:14, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Like this? Eaglebranch 18:34, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Much better! GB (Grocery store) 18:40, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
 * While the shade is better... There's not a halo-effect around the darker (correct) color, creating a pale-gray line all the way around the body color section. That's not much better, It's just about even up with where it was. Eaglebranch, You'll need to fix that pale line around the edges and then shade it.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 20:22, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Right, I got rid of the halo and then shaded so that he would look rounder on the edges. I think it looks better. Eaglebranch 14:53, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Definitely improved. But the shading could be intensified (reference some other, accepted, pixels). Right now it on the minimal side and isn't fully giving dept the to the image.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 03:15, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Version number 4. I took your advice Kitsu and bumped up the shading. Whadya guys think? Eaglebranch Talk 15:36, 6 August 2008 (UTC)


 * I say that you could just add a little more shading and blur it together. Other than that, I think its great. --Shim 02:04, 17 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks Shim! Whadda you think Gorse?.   Eaglebranch (Talk) 13:00, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Gorse has been crazy-busy of late. But I do still have issues... Namely, that the shading is still all really hard-edged. Which is very inconsistent with the style the other finished pieces are using...  Kitsufox Fox's Den 03:40, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Declining due to lack of progress for a month on the piece, despite requests for updates. Will be archived tomorrow.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 14:36, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Mistyfoot - Declining
I drew Mistyfoot, how do you guys like it?FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever 13:13, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Please sign your username when you offer up an image. I think it looks good. Maybe a little more shading in the front. Other than that, it looks fine. The fact that she's a deputy though makes me wonder. Eaglebranch Talk 19:14, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

Asides the fact that I think Mistyfoot has short fur, her color looks about right and she looks good. The shading also needs to be blurred a bit. -- Bramble Bramble's Realm 22:27, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

I did the longhair base and used Blurtool. Now what do you think?FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever 13:13, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Just curious, what is Blurtool? Eaglebranch Talk 20:49, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Blurtool is an editing tool in quality paint programs that lets you blur areas of the image. FxC, it could use a bit more shading, to make the image more dynamic... and there's also the issue of Mistyfoot being a Deputy... We don't have a Deputy Blank yet...  Kitsufox Fox's Den 14:25, 8 August 2008 (UTC)


 * I was thinking...you made Brambleclaw with a warrior base. Well, you said you wanted pixels for every rank the character has held, and for pretty much all of the OS Mistyfoot was a warrior. FxC 12:56, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Brambleclaw was made before he was a deputy. That was the most current rank for him at the time. As for wanting the ranks.. yes. Eventually we'll want that. But currently the priority needs to be on producing with the current rank-image. We can likely forgive it being the wrong base since we do want past images, but I just want to stress that we should work in the currents and focus on characters we have bases for rather than making back images at this juncture.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 22:53, 14 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Bramble is right about the need for some blending on that shading.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 03:43, 16 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Hey, I'm currently searching for another gray she-cat I can submit this as. --FxC **The Waterfall** 13:17, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Declining. Previous comments on shading stand if it's re-submitted as another character. Will be archived tomorrow.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 14:37, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Sorreltail- Declined
My first try at char art go ahead and critique--Redflare 00:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Sorreltail isn't brown and red, she's just black, white, and orange. The inside of her ear is completely orange, not pink. She has amber eyes, not green. She could also use a little more shading. G B 00:33, 25 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Oh woops didn't realize the ear, I'll fix it tommorrow too lazy today. And currently my photoshop is acting up, so i'm using MS paint, but I will do phtoshop.--Redflare 00:41, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

I just noticed that the background isn't quite transparent, but that can be fixed. You might want to blend the markings together, because now they look like markings, not fur.-- J K  O  20:18, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

The orange markings on the pelt are very distinct, like some paint was used to make them. Swifty {ASTRX} 20:30, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

I added another version its not done, but if I don't put it now I never will. I will add blenging later.--Redflare 22:52, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

She looks like there's dust coming off of her. The shading is hard to see, and the eyes are... weird. They should be amber, not a squinty kind of white. Also, that red mark shouldn't be there. G B 23:28, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Could you try using a different file format? --Spottedleaf x firestar 23:36, 26 September 2008 (UTC)

Sxf, what you're asking for isn't required, and is a lot harder than you think. That would take about a day to change the format. The format Redflare is using is fine, as far as I know. G B 00:45, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

It is NOT hard. All she has to do is open it in Gimp, which I have, and save it as a different file and format. I could do it. Want me to do it, Redflare?--Spottedleaf x firestar 15:49, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
 * WHATEVA i fixed it already. Want me to post it? It's still the same image, only fixed.--Spottedleaf x firestar 16:57, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Sxf, I don't think you're even allowed to "fix" other people's images. Probably best that you don't upload it. There's no reason Redflare has to change his file format!


 * I forgot to tell you, i didn't need to change the format after all. Grocery Bag, I don't think YOU'RE allowed to speak for Redflare when it's HER image we're talking about!!! I THOUGHT we were supposed to ask!!!! Redflare, what do you say? :-)

That was an un-needed attack on me, Sxf. Please don't do that again. Redflare is a guy. As far as I know, Redflare does not need to change the file format. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B 17:20, 27 September 2008 (UTC)


 * sry... sry.... i was kinda stressed.... sry.. oh yah, sorry, Redflare, I guess it's bcuz most of the warriors fans i know are girls.. hey! i know how to settle this!! I'll make my OWN Sorreltail!! i sooo smart.

Acually I am a guy and a girl we are two siblings using this acount. Right now it is the guy speaking and doing the charart. I do need to change the format its a jpg which I did by accident, but I don't have time now so I will do it later. But SxF(Love your name!) I want to fix it myself. I'm getting a new photoshop disc this week then I will add shading. Also SXF is right the format is very needed to be changed and also guys can you not spam up this page I want it to be easy to follow. and that was an un-needed attack on GB so please stop.--Redflare 20:39, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Redflare, no offense but the image looks a little...warped, if you know what I mean. <span style="font:11px Comic Sans MS;display:inline;border:#00CCCC 1px solid;background-color:#996633;padding:0 4px 0 4px;">FxC **The Waterfall** 22:32, 18 October 2008 (UTC)
 * No improvements have been made for around a month. So I'm declining to clear up clutter. Will be archived tomorrow. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 14:52, 28 October 2008 (UTC)