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Rabbitleap (W) ~For Approval
Here it is, finally finished!

Please don't align your images. Also, define the shading. 03:33, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

I was just about to do that xD

Reuploaded. Here.

I saw some waste.

Smudge/blur the earpink a bit, and make it a bit less bright. Also, smoothen out your highlights :] 03:54 Sun Sep 13

He needs to match this image http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/5/5f/Rabbitleap_%28TC%29.kit.png/revision/latest?cb=20150912210231 If not already matched. Ignores this if its invalid. --Dewsplash (talk) 03:58, September 13, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash 03:58, September, 13, 2015

Reuploaded.

Blur the ear pink 06:12, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading everywhere but the legs. Define the light on the legs. 12:26, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more. 17:07, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So beautiful.

Reuploaded again. Ugly earpink :P

Nice job! Can you blur the shading and highlights some more, and can you possibly dull the earpink to a paler color other than the bright pink it is now? If you need some more help, you can color pick from actual images of brown cats. 22:56, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm sorry if its not that pale.

Dull and blur the ear pink and smooth out the shading on the haunch; it's a bit blotchy 04:23, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the earpink a bit more pale. Also what tool do i use to smoothen out the shading. (I use pixlr btw)

If you decide to rejoin the project, I'll add you in as an apprentice. And as for the image, smooth out the shading 10:14, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink looks kinda neon, can you dull it down a bit? #ab4526 is a good color, I'd suggest you use that, but you don't have to. Just dull it down more, if you want. 10:26, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also, may I rejoin the project as an apprentice?

Smooth out the shading and blur the earpink? Also, remember to add a timestamp with your signature. 20:25:17 16 Sep 2015 (UTC)

How do I smoothen out the shading? PoppyShine 20:40, September 16, 2015

It looks to me like the shading is a lot redder than the main pelt. Maybe match it more? 15:02, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

To smooth out the shading, just blur it until it blends with the pelt more. 07:15, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you use a duller hue for your earpink, and smudge it more? You should reshape it a little, too - you should make it more, um, triangular? XD 08:32, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define shading on the front leg closest to us 08:32, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Does this look better? Reuploaded.

Reuploaded. Made it look better.

Blur the shading just a tiny bit more? 01:18, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Match the colour on the | approved kit image, please. The earpink and eye colour are both incorrect. ~ Also, please blur earpink a bit more, and dull shading, esp on the main body. It's a tad too red 10:49, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the legs could use a little definiton + tail needs smoothening, too. Sorry for the deluge of comments haha ^.^ 10:51, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

The shading still seems a bit too red, and I think it's leaking a little along the back. 02:39, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with BC. Define shading on the legs as well? 03:28, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Should i lighten the shading or darken the shading?

Blur it, please and add depth 23:24, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Choose a duller hue for the shading. It really has nothing to do with how light or dark the shading is imo :3 01:20, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest putting the shading layer mode onto Multiply, but you don't have to. 02:19, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry I have a lot of school work to do, so I cant really work on it that much.

I think the shading is leaking along the back. 16:24, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and add some depth, and this will be good to go, I believe. 16:48, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Maybe round out the shading and smooth it more?

Sorry if this is spam, but this could stand to be more paler.--Dewsplash (talk) 02:12, October 2, 2015 (UTC) Dewsplash, 02:12, October, 2, 2015

I agree to a certain point - the shading can be darker.

Early Settler blanks ~ For Approval
thanks 2 the gays that uploaded for me :* i know they're way too big but can someone like recommend a way to make them smaller that doesn't pixelate them?? ty 14:11 Wed Sep 16

Maybe make the long-haired's tail a bit fluffier? These are so awesome! 14:35, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding some tufts of fur to the back of the front legs/elbows on the longfurred. Cats normally have longer fur there regardless, but it would be even more prominent on a long furred cat. Also, try to make the tails a tad more.. rounded and soft?? It has a few sharp edges here and there, so if you could soften that it would be great. You did wonderfully on these! 16:22, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

For the back legs, do you mind trying to make the femur...protude, a little, if you get what I mean? if you don't feel free to ask - sorry, my brain is fried. 17:42, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you fix the paws, they look a bit off 18:00, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the image smaller? 20:04, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know of any way to make them smaller without pixelating them - just make them smaller, use whatever tool on whatever program you have to harden the lines, if possible, and if that makes sense, and then go in manually and make sure the whole lineart is two pixels wide. Definitely make the long-haired tail way, way fluffier, as well as the cheeks, neck fur, and belly fur, look at the queen blank to see what I'm talking about. The far back leg (behind the cat) is bent way too sharply, and the toes should be facing straight to the right, not turned towards us. The paw on the back leg closest to us looks like it's lifted in the air, and that wouldn't work since the front leg on the same side is definitely lifted in the air, the cat wouldn't be able to balance like that; flatten that paw so it looks like it's set firmly against the ground. The lifted front leg, the paw looks like it has too many joints - either get rid of that bend just above the paw and have it held straight up with the toes held out forward, or bend the paw back. Also, your perspective seems off; the far front leg is much longer than both back legs. Make sure the paws on the same side of the body is even with each other on the ground. I apologize for the wall of text. I was trying to be as specific as I could. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:32, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

The tail looks a tad uneven- it looks a bit... Bumpy in some places? 02:30, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

The paws look a little thick too me idk 15:07, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Cats aren't that ... for lack of better words, "skinny". Skinny enough that you can see their bones. It seems like in this case the point is to see the muscles and bones, and I don't think they should be seen. However feel free to disagree with that. 23:09, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Here's a friendly reminder to not forget to re-upload! 06:53, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. bullied david into uploading them for me ( thanks nerd ) anyways i kind of butchered them while resizing i m sorry. also, superfluff. 11:20 Mon Sep 21

Ok so there seems to be a little too much fluff on the long haired kitties. For all four paws can you make the lineart smoother? And where the femur protrudes, the lineart should be smooth there as well. 11:36, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

On the contrary, I think there's too many little lines of scruff, if that makes sense, but not not enough fluffiness. Thicken the neck and cheek fur a lot, again, look at the queen blank to see the kind of thickness I mean, and make the tail a lot bigger and fluffier. Make the lifted front paw much thinner, and maybe just make it one toe facing us instead of both, that makes more sense anatomically. Also, get rid of the little toe thing on the closest back leg to us, those only go on the insides of a cat's leg, not the outside, and also cats only have them on the front legs. Nice update. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 12:17, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the head slightly? 01:45, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the leg that's lifted is a little too curved. 22:48, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reminder to not forget to re-upload! 05:12, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Its only been four days since the last reupload, Fox. I'm pretty sure Berry is allowed extended time to reupload considering blanks are more time consuming than an ordinary charart image. 05:41, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I know, but I don't think it'd hurt to remind her or something. 07:31, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

shes not always on a computer, she'll get to them when she can. also, with the front leg toe thing, maybe shift them up some? 12:12, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the heels less "poked upwards"? my horrible explaining

re-uploaded. thanks 2 david again 12:06 Mon Sep 28

Femur still protrudes - mind fixing that? 18:29, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

The leg in the back farthest from us looks like it's lifted, which would mean the cat is balancing on two legs. Is that intended? 20:14, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think the heel should be at a softer angle(aka less 90 degree-ish). The cat would break its leg like that. 23:59, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think Berry had actually said on Skype that she used a picture of Bella, her cat, for the reference for the feet? I don't think it's bad, especially if she used a reference picture, and there's no better one than one of your own cat. Plus, we all know cats are weird and have their own logic when it comes to anatomy and all of that. I've seen cats in pretty weird and bizarre positions.

Berry I'm sorry, I told you not to make the hind leg protrude when I was the one to suggest it. <_< What I meant right now, is that it protrudes a little too much, but looking at pictures of cats in general (and my cat), I think it looks fine now.

I still think the joint protrudes too much. It should only be pointed that much if the back half of the cat is lower than the front and the legs are bending, but here the back half is mostly even with the front, curving the slightest bit down, so the legs shouldn't be that bent. Here's an example of what I mean: http://cache2.asset-cache.net/gc/78359625-ginger-tabby-cat-standing-side-view-gettyimages.jpg?v=1&c=IWSAsset&k=2&d=aD%2F%2FqyCLrUbpWYiqK2GFsNwYSssbvBphD95v12k6jDPEgZ4FrOnwkCTANzrz2sTo The leg is a little more splayed to the side than in your image, but you can see that the joint doesn't poke upwards like you've drawn, it slopes down a bit more. Also, there's some weird bumps in the tail, and the tip is a bit too thin compared to the base. The lifted paw is too thick, and the toe should be longer and pointing the paw to the side, and the head should be a bit larger, the paws a bit smaller, and the far hind leg is bent a bit too sharply. I'll post a redline later. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:53, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

I can't explain, so I did this to represent the comments I have.

Here's my redline: http://www.ezimba.com/work/151003C/ezimba11244517360500.png The way the back slopes is a little wonky, so I couldn't quite figure out how to make the height of the back legs work. But I hope this helps. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 15:49, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (Ro) - For Approval
My First Tabby I know its not as good as winterflurrys infact its not good at all, but please be nice. Belllastar (talk) 00:47, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Nice job! The stripes are thinner on the kit, could you make them thinner? 00:53, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Adding to what was said above the main base color seemed more pale and the stripes could be more defined and darker and please don't align your images.--Dewsplash (talk) 01:05, September 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:05, September, 21, 2015

Reups fixed shadeing just saw comments Belllastar (talk) 01:38, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

The tabby pattern looks a bit overblurred and the stripes are a little paintbrushy; sharpen the pattern 01:57, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading as well. 21:09, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail 20:10, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 01:55, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I dont know if I can, no matter how hard I try I cant ger the stipes right, I know I need the smudge them but its realy hard would it be within the rules tho have someone smudge the stripes for me I have a Non blured/smudged version. Belllastar (talk) 14:31, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

If you can't fix them, I would recommend completely re-doing the stripes with the Pencil tool at 1px instead. What program do you use? -- 15:21, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Pixlr and/or sumopaint Belllastar (talk) 16:50, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, if you can't fix them you can try and redo the stripes. 01:29, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this hasn't been uploaded since at least the 21st, so as per the guidelines, I need to decline this.

Taking over. Completely redid it. Reups 13:41, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a ot more 21:32, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 00:35, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe add some thicker stripes and put a little more thickness on the stripes? The looked like drawn lines :P 13:55, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

They were just as thin on the kit. Could you add a few more, though? 15:45, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I am only drawing as many tabby stripes as were on the kit, so not really. I gotta match. 19:09, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Oops, I saw that the stripes were closer together on the kit, and I had a brain fart and thought that that meant that there were more. 22:02, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:16, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (Lo) ~ For Approval
I messed up so badly >< This a record for me, first tortoiseshell and loner. Comments? 23:30, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the belly shading, and there doesn't appear to be any shading whatsoever on the legs not facing us. Is that intended? -- 00:05, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think it is intended but you're right, it should be added. Can you blur the shading between the elbow and haunch? And define the tail shading. 00:51, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

The shadings looking a little flat. Define it a bit?, idk --Dewsplash (talk) 00:59, September 23, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 00:59, September, 23, 2015

There's texture on the tortie parts 01:31, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload The left legs shading wasn't there at first because I forgot it >< I think there's supposed to be texture, but I could be wrong. 07:26, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see texture on the tortie parts. Also, define the main body shading plz. 09:05, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think the patterns on and the patches itself should be more smudged than this.

Reupload 23:00, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the patches more with a 1px hard edged brush 03:26, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 07:44, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on her front legs 09:51, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:00, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the neck/face a bit. 00:34, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:10, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the lighter pattern can be smudged more and have a smoother transition with the darker parts. 03:09, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

any advice what that? I if I smudge it anymore >< 23:07, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine to be honest. 01:30, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you just smudge the patch where the body meets the tail? The rest of the patches look fine. 13:17, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:08, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Stealthfire, this is beautiful, as always with your art. 00:23, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

I apologize, but I still can't see texture. Would you like the file for my version of the loner? I got all the colors and stuff from Beeb's file. 02:53, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Which texture do you mean? I have texture over the tortoiseshell patches and texture over the edges of the white near the patches. 22:51, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

We can't see the texture at all, actually. Are you making the texture the same way you did for Houndstar..? Because the thick lines line that aren't texture... they're lines. They should be thin and probably smudged or stylized whichever way you prefer.

I can tell you that the rogue's got texture that is drawn with long lines then smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 09:44, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I've drawn the texture one pixel thick, and smudged it. I have a terrible smudge tool because it doesn't give me hard edged option. I made another layer of texture because it's difficult to see, but I'm thinking along the lines of darkening it if there's still trouble seeing it. 02:08, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the texture thicker. Not the lines themselves, they should be thin, but I mean put the lines closer to each other and add more lines, if that makes sense? An maybe try and smudge them a little more? It still looks a little... line-ish? 21:19, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:02, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 06:23, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:40, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gonna be that person, but I still cannot see texture. Try using a paint brush maybe? 02:39, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I'll try defining the texture more. It's got two layers and it's been darkened. I'm surprised you cannot see it. 07:25, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Nettle (Lo) -CBA
Ahh the texture took me way too long. 21:18, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? Beautiful! 21:29, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the belly shading just a tad. Wow, this is really gorgeous. 00:51 Sun Sep 27

he looks too light and his texture should be dulled down. 07:15, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:43, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Wow. :O This isn't some texture you get all day! <3 define light on his legs/paws?

Reuploaded 21:03, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the farthest leg from us and the stomach. 16:53, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Note, I might end up handing off this character because I just realized there's an early settler named Raven Pelt, who's art I want to do for obvious reasons. 20:42, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 00:15, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudberry (TC) (MCA) ~ CBA
11:09, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a bit on this --> side of the face 18:19, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 20:14, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the style is not like the shadows and lights for the first pixel of the character. That is mine. ✨ShineStar✨ 06:16, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

...Are you saying that the shading style doesn't match? Because shading doesn't need to match. Anyway, Sorrel, could you smudge the earpink just a tad? This is pretty :) 10:21, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading? 10:31, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading overall, I'm having a hard time seeing it. 12:37, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

What are you talking about? The shading looks fine to me. 15:02, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source, it looks like there are two light sources and neither are defined. 15:51, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur earpink on this ---> ear? And this is just a friendly question but shouldn't the pixel match the published one? If not, that's fine XD

I think Foxy was talking about the shading being over smudged, which I agree, it could be defined more. 10:59, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups @Skyewolf um it's coming from the top-left/leftish - I thought it looked pretty obvious. 15:48, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups oops forgot the ear. And Autumnbright; what do you mean? It does match. It's just a different shading tint and style. 17:15, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some ore. 16:53, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 15:45, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 01:53, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Pine Needle (ki) ~ For Approval
him smol 18:33, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she be in long furred since she's in RiverClan? 12:36, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

pine needle is a tom, and hes a former rogue. it doesnt apply, not to mention the clans have only just been made then. 12:39, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. 11:45, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

I am, Bramble - it's just that I haven't had a comment apart from the fur length, that's all. I'll get to the shading after I return from the [incredibly new addition of another] art class today. 09:50, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could also tweak the highlights/lighter areas a bit. I'm having trouble seeing the image in general.

re-up 01:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Stormtail (A) - For Approval
Yeah 00:09, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

His images are short-furred, not long-furred. =P

XD That and he should be a brighter blue, he's a little dull in comparison to the StarClanner. Also, define facial and back shading?

Re-uploaded Gosh, how did I not realize he was short-furred?? 20:59, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad? 00:12, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Much better! Define facial shading and brighten earpink a tad?

Re-uploaded 20:41, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the shoulder. 09:43, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:00, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading along his back and his tail?

Re-uploaded Note that some of the part along the back is in light 20:39, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading 09:52, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:36, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Cats of the Park (Blank) - Withdrawn
The female blanks can have the eyelashes added on afterwards... but I'm having issues with the short-haired blank? If someone could give me a hand with that, I'd appreciate it. Also the face. The face is bad. I'm proud of the body itself on the long-hair, but the face just totally ruins it.

I think the face should be less... narrowed? In this position, i think the eyes, nose and muzzle etc should be slightly... Moved more to (our) the left because of how the cat is positioned. 10:57, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the cat's head should be moved more to the -->, and it should be a bit rounder(less elongated). 13:25, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the "arms" should be more straight... right now it looks a bit...
 * pulls out the second book of Harry Potter*  Btw shouldn't this pose's head be bended to a "bowing position"? I think you should squeeze the face downwards and make the ear like, face downwards. Bare with my wording =P

Bramble, I literally used the exact same stance you did, since that's the one that won. I actually referenced your blank when I did it. I also asked for help on the face, because I can't do it. Just telling me what to do gets us nowhere. I need visuals.

The head looks a little too far to the side if it's facing forward, I don't think the neck would bend like that. It would make more sense to have it facing to the left and slightly down, like on the other blank, or else bring the head more to the right. The chest is much too wide. Look at this image: http://cache1.asset-cache.net/xt/75376402.jpg?v=1&g=fs1%7C0%7CDOR%7C76%7C402&s=1 The chest is mostly just the two front legs intersecting. There should not be that much bulk to the chest. Would you like a redline for some suggestions on anatomy, and positions of the eyes and such? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:42, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Em, to be honest I think Winter's were way better than mine... Mine was screwed up because I had to enlarge them. I can't lineart either, so I tried my best. This is what I meant (I literally scribbled so) hope you get what I was trying to explain

maybe this for a very general redline? i dont know....you dont have to use it. (tfw u havent drawn properly in a couple years) 16:42, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

So my Photoshop crashed and I lost the file that had the new version of the blanks on, and I have no motivation to redo these since it took me a good five hours just for the first one. Someone else can have these. =/

Any chance I could take this one? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:01, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

If you want, sure. I won't object to it.

Can I please have Ripple ;-;

Cool. Can I claim it on the claim table, or should I wait until this is archived? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:11, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Silver, you can't claim an image that the blanks don't even have now. Please stop claiming them so soon. Jayie, you can claim it on the table. Might as well take over here. No point in archiving. 19:50, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Beech (K) ~ For Approval
Attempting to replicate someone else's styling of shading is... difficult. -- 20:40, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. :) Would you like the file for Beech? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:14, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Aaw she cute uwu You did really good in matching the rogue. Define tail shading? Also, there's this lump of unsmudged/blurred pencilly brown on the top of her head that I can't make heads or tails (tails hehe) of. beech be lookin like a teddy bear 

Re-uploaded. Twice, actually; one for the genuine update and then again to remove some waste I spotted at the last moment. I have no clue how I let that pixelated blob slide; it looked like she got pooped on or something, lolo. And I'm fine, Jay, but thank you! -- 15:39, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Alrighty, in that case, there should be much more of the pale muzzle/belly color on the face. It should cover both cheeks about halfway up the face, and all around the eyes, though some of it is covered by mottles. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:11, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Oh gosh, I'm so sorry for not uploading for the past days. I got battered by a brief bout of the flu and couldn't force myself into updating till now. I'm working on it right now. -- 18:36, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is this better? -- 18:55, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Dew (K) ~ For Approval
Yeahhhh. Before commenting, I know her ears are supposed to be notched (i forgot to do that sorry T T) I don't really like this too much. I hope I matched her enough tho :/ Thanks to Jayie for the file!

Re-upload: I fixed the ears.

Oh god, this is stunning *.* try defining the shading on the legs? It looks slightly flat. Also, don't align your images :p 11:47, October 1, 2015 (UTC)

Wow who's your charart mentor? Must be someone amazing XP Define the earpink a tiiiidy more?

Re-upload: Here we go~ And yeah, Silver, my dear mentor is amazing asf. Ever heard of Fox? She be awesome.

OMG thank you so much ;; lighten the shading on ==> ear? 12:38, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: (tfw you donut know how to lighten shading on a specific area :c)

Define the light on the back hindpaw. With this source, light would hit that area also. As for your shading question, try using different layers of shading at different opacities, I've found that helps tremendously. 21:34, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups: Fixed hindpaw shading, I'll get around to the earpink in the next upload.

Dappletail (Ki) ~ For Approval
Dapplekit

awww... Smooth out the paw shading? 05:11, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I knew it would be the paw shading! x3

She's adorable om :D Define facial shading a little?

What a cutie :3 define the light on the back paw? 12:17, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-upz

Speckletail (K) ~ For Approval
round 2 04:47, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

This would have been declined because Nettlesky had it reserved first, but she was nice and changed her reservation so I guess you're lucky :P For image: Can you define earpink? (I hope you didn't forget it lol XP)

Thanks Nettlesky ;.; @Bramble I'm not sure how though, because the more I alter it, the more it doesn't match her other images. Any tips would be appreciated. 09:05, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Nettlesky, are you sure you don't want it? ;; it seems unfair to you. I can gladly surrender this if you wish for it 12:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Nopezz because 1- I doubt I can match it (I failed Dappletail), and 2- I found something better :3 Thanks for the offer though! <3

Define the earpink please. This looks wonderful! 21:32, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Could you give me some tips on that? I feel if I alter the color, it wouldn't match her other images 23:59, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

One-eye (Ki) - For Approval
All colors from the StarClan image. I wasn't sure about the white eye thing, so I gave it to her.

Aww :3 define the light on the legs just a little? 12:37, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

I don't think she'd have the white eye--she was blinded after birth by a badger. 14:51, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

can you provide a cite for that? there isnt one on her page. 14:56, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

It was sometime in Bluestar's Prophecy. Anyone have a copy? 15:43, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

It does say that, yes, but I don't think the timeframe was ever specified. It says her apprenticeship was delayed, but that doesn't mean she was already an apprentice. For all we know, she could have still been a kit. Unless it specifically says "One-eye was an apprentice when this happened", I don't want to remove the damage to the eye.

I can ask Kate, since she wrote it?--Dewsplash (talk) 15:59, October 3, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 15:59, October, 3, 2015

There's no need to bother Kate for every little thing. It's fine as it is and unless book evidence comes forward that she was an apprentice when it happened, we can just keep it as-is. It's not that hard to tweak it later on down the road anyways.

I think the tail is contradicing your light source, if you know what I mean.. 16:09, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

No, it's not. I've used this same light source for years, and the only shading that originally contradicted it was the head shading, which I've since then switched.

yo turns out the eyes should be removed, i found the cite:

"She turned so that starlight glowed in her remaining eye; the other had been clawed out by a badger when she was an apprentice, blinding her." its in cotc, not bp. 16:13, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, look, a wild citation appeared. Re-uploaded.

Could you define the shading on <<< leg? Also... that cite tells us when she lost her eye, right? She had a white eye before that, right? That's why she was called White-Eye and not One-Eye until she actually lost it. Just a thought. 20:50, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm just gonna keep the eyes as they are, because we really don't know what happened as a kit. That cite is for when she was an apprentice.

Here's a quote from her page: "It had been stated in Code of the Clans that she had lost one of her eyes to a badger. In Bluestar's Prophecy, she is mentioned to have a cloudy and blind eye, and said not to have lost her eye until around the time she retired." 22:07, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudberry (MC) - For Approval
meh 12:47, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the shading and smooth it out a little bit?

Remove the shading on the tip of the tail and make the shading flow better with the shape of the tail. 13:18 Fri Oct 2

Re-uploaded 13:32, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. She's supposed to be white and this kinda makes her look gray. 19:48, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more 20:07, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I wouldn't blur it, because it seems that she isn't blurring, instead smudging, so smoothen out a bit. 21:28, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think a little bit of shading leaked on the edge of her back leg?

Thorn (Lo) - For Approval
does she need more mange? 03:28 Sat Oct 3

Darken and define the shading 05:24, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded now with more mange! 21:16 Sat Oct 3

Do you mind defining the light on all the legs? They seem to be all in shadow on my screen. 21:31, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Flashnose (K) ~ For Approval
So proud of Rustykit <3333

Adorable! :D Define tail and facial shading

Want the file for the queen? 05:24, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Autumn, facial shading is optional I believe? Anyway darken shading just by a teeeeny bit overall?

Re upped I darkened the shading by a little and added another layer of shading. @Fox thanks but I think I'll be fine here^^

My bad then, Bramble :P Kind of petty but maybe smudge the markings above her eyes instead of blur them? If you think it's fine you can leave it as it is