Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Creekfeather (W) ~ Tweaked
Original artist was Elorisa. I basically just darkened the stripes and the shading. Comments? 22:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could basically re-do the stripes? They're bothering me. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then that would basically be redoing the whole thing, right? ... and darken the tail shading. 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Um, no, it would just be re-doing the stripes... 00:25, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

But redoing the stripes would mean erasing the stripes, and then adding stripes, and adding shading again, even if you used layers, the shading would have to be redone...whatever. 00:27, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What's with all the hostility lately? Define the shading a little more. 00:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Then the shading could be re-done, if possible. 00:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me :). But I'm not much help with this, I'm the original artist xD. Lighten the stripes a tad, they seem really dark :3. Looks great, Dapplecloud! Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, can you make that large circly stripe on the chest less circlish? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Dapplecloud? 02:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm still working on it. 00:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Then why don't you upload it? :3 23:55, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define/darken the shading a little. -- 04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of like the stripes on the white, even if it isn't conventional. There's some blurred lineart on the ear. Define and brighten the earpink.  ❀ wild  heart ❀ 04:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Otterheart (W)- For Approval
Taking a break from all the tabbies, tortoiseshells, etc. and just doing a solid cat. XD She needed to be long haired, and the shading was a bit blotchy. OA was Bramble I believe. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:02, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw. Hands down, you are amazing with chararts. Darken the earpink just a tad ;3 23:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Awwww, thanks Splashy! ^^; ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:58, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

W00t; I love solids. ;D Can you darken the shading a bit? I like dark shading. =) Great job! 00:55, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I love solid cats too. :) I forgot how much fun they were to do. XD Anyways, darkened the shading, but changes aren't showing. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:58, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Bleh, I suck at solids >.> *eyes Fallowfern* brighten the tail highlight and blurr it X) -- 04:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Solids are boring. I'd rather do a tabby or a tortie. Define the shading a tad. xD 16:00, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's pretty! Define the ear pink a tad though. 16:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:50, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and earpink, and, maybe it's just me, but I believe you have blurred lineart down the chest. Nice job, Paleclaw! Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:21, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Also, lighten the tail highlight. 20:40, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The highlights are almost invisible now except for the tail one, as they were at like 3% opacity before. There's no blurred lineart on the chest. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:58, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Heatherstar (L) - Redone
Here eye's kinda creep me out... Anyway, first leader charart up and ever since I first saw her's the highlight's have just been really bothering me. Redid the charart because the shading proved to be a real pain in the tail. Anyway, comments? 23:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make her eyes like they were. Make the nose a gray color since she was described as being gray (I think). Blur the shading a little more. (it's so much easier when the changes show to critique >~<) 23:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, make the earpink fill the ear to the line. Otherwise it's always gonna be small. 23:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Forgot to erase the waste around the head, I'll get rid of it later. @Ivy, she was described as pinkish-gray but I gave her a gray nose anyway. 23:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Dull the highlights a little, especially the chest and haunch. Also, blur the tail higlight. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:19, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

@Shadewing. I think you're looking at the wrong one. The changes aren't showing up now. 01:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry! xC Shadewing  Blades of the Night  01:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There's some waste around the head; delete those, and blur the shaidng more. Great job! 20:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are very blotchy. Make them smoother and move them upwards. 01:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Move the highlights on the tail more towards the middle.  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER The Peace is Perfect☯  03:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the left earpink bigger, they look kind of uneven. 16:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Runningstorm (K) ~ Redone
Redone as *shorthair, and to match other pixels. Since I did Runningstorm's warrior, might as well do his kit, eh? OA was Dawnfeather I believe. You know where to find the changes :P 00:12, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think you mean shorthair....xD brighten the earpink. Sky- Killer of Daleks 00:16, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Derp, *shorthair. Thanks x) 00:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the light part on the chest. Very nice! 01:38, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white part, pinken the earpink, and darken the shading. Good job! 20:34, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :) You know where to find the changes :D 22:05, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur the chest; it looks a bit blotchy. Nice work! 22:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :D  04:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) (W) - Redone
Original artist was Sandstar and later tweaked by Goldenpaw to have a torn ear. He was listed as needing tweaks for multiple things (as different entries), and I deemed it that the image pretty much needed redone, as it had shading issues and needed to actually be flecked, not just having circles. I hope he actually looks flecked (I used Ferncloud as a reference), but if he looks more mottled, I won't have a problem changing that if you guys think it's a problem. Comments for improvement? 02:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Ivy! he looks dazzling! Just define the shading a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:31, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dangit I just realized I didn't save an .xcf copy of this. And thanks! 16:46, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and foreleg. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:18, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and the need for that can be thanked due to my epic fail -_- 20:53, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

In Cats of the Clans, he is depicted with stripes near his eyes, legs, and paws.SShould we add those? 21:09, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

CotC has so many mistakes, I don't like those should be considered accurate. However, if you want to add them, go ahead. 21:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

The chest shading needs to be blurred, as well as the back shading. Also, define the flecks on his tail. Great job! 22:05, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You're seeing the right one, right? Because I just blurred it 22:08, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried the tabby stripes on him. 22:25, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry! I was looking at the wrong one. So, its the version with the stripes, right>? :3 Blur the stripes, and try making them not so straight. 22:34, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just added a few stripes that weren't straight, as I do not have the layers for this anymore. 22:43, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now they just look kinda messy xD Define them a bit, and change the eye. 01:58, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by change the eye? 02:14, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

He looks.......werid with the stripes, maybe make them smaller? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:41, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to redo this. I've been so overwhelmed these past few days with junk to do, and it didn't help that I lost the layers to this. 02:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

D: but it's so beautiful...  ❀ wild  heart ❀    02:52, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye like Lionblaze. Okay xD 14:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes should stay, though, if you are thinking about taking them away. Most spotted cats have stripes there. 15:58, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

But it sisn't in his desc, i don't think it should be added unless we get a ref for it(And he isn't spotted, she flecked.). Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:44, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and redone. Thanks Wildy, but I think it's much better now. And Maplepool, Iceheart says the stripes should say. I made them kinda like "ghost markings" though. 23:15, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ Redone
Original artist was Sparrowsong, and she needed to have mottled tortoiseshell patches. Comments? 03:38, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Define the earpink. 21:04, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the mottles near the head? They look too distinct. Also, make the earpink bigger, and darken teh shading. 21:54, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:10, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth the mottles a bit more and maybe make them a bit bigger and blur the patches a bit more and enlarge the ear-pink. 00:42, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also darken them. Make them more like her warrior image, as in, darker. XD 14:34, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Nice, Icey. XD 17:45, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MC) ~ Tweaked
Highlights made it look weird, and I personally think that the color brown it was didn't look right. Changes may not be showing here, but y'all know where to look. 02:06, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

You evil edit conflicter. The shading's odd looking...maybe darken it and blur? 02:20, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pale belly. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Icey pointed that out to me AFTER I uploaded it. Working on it now. 02:39, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:18, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink a tad more <font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  03:33, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Did you look at the right image? The ear pink is centered. 03:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. 14:33, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't lighten it anymore. 14:57, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MC) - Tweaked
- ok so i re-did the highlights. i understand they were cool and furry, but they were unrealistic. She also needed to be a dark grey and she looked more black then grey, so I colored her differnetly, and re-did her shading and highlights. i also thickened the scars on her face and tweaked the ear nick. Comments? 02:09, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Awesomeness! darken the shading along the back & on the back right foot -- 02:16, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading on the herbs, and I never got this so I'll ask now, why are they yellow? It just seems a bit odd, and never really made much sense to me.... I mean green-yellow looks fine, but just yellow..... Yeah. XD Also, it says torn earS. Meaning both. So tear the back on too. Also, point the tips of the scars on her face, and maybe add a few more scars in random places, as it says she's battle-scarred. This looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks =) I added shading to the herbs and made them greener, made the scars on the face pointer, tore the other ear, and added more scars. Commets? 14:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

As i learned with Clawface, only the base of the tail can scars, beause that is the only part of the tail that has flesh, the upper part of the tail is just mussle, bones and fur. Move the scar on her tail down. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wait...what? XD 15:58, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you shorten the snout again like Cloudskye had it? It's one of her most prominent features. 18:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Icy, cats can't have scars on their tails, there is no flesh on the upper part of the tail(Like where you have her scar.) Move it down, or get rid of it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Shellheart, idkh. xD 18:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

You could ask Cloudskye to do it, I think. 22:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

But then the layers would be removed. When someone tells me it's ready to be archived, I'll do it. But it'd be the best if someone told me how. 23:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Pine(TS) (R)- Tweaked
Here, he is....i got bored with Pebblefoot.....so i withdrew him, and here is Pine, i just gave him battle-scars. *OA was Brambleclaw14 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:23, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cool scars. the pairs on his throat look akward. make some longer & shorter -- 02:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erase one scar on the haunch and make the pair further apart. Add depth to the eye. 02:26, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:30, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to add the OA, i feel so smart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:47, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit so it's not so candy-floss-pink, and sharpen the ends of the scars. <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- At LAST, i hated the color of the ear-pink, and I did, it is because the are blurred so much it looks that way.I took the ear-pink clor from Cloudtail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Remove one scar from the chest. 14:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Aww but i LIKE his scars xD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:34, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

xD Make the two scars on the chest further apart, please. 15:56, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hutch (KP) - Redone
Here's Hutch. OA was Ashshadow, and it needed to be lightened, but when I tried to lighten it, it looked kind of green, and I couldn't properly adjust the saturation to make it a normal shade of brown again. The stripes were kind of unrealistic to begin with. Comments? <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    02:52, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, i'm not sure if it will be declined or not..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:53, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. I'm archiving one of them anyways. It stays. Wonderful work, Wildheart! I missed looking at your chararts. =) 02:55, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then, i did to, define the shading a bit. so good to see you again :) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:56, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aw, thanks, guys :3 I didn't know what you mean, Maplepool, so I darkened the shading instead. <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:05, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

That is what define is anyway :P Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:17, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, awesome job!! Pinken the earpink -- 02:44, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Bloo :3 <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild  <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! All I see is that you need to add depth to the eye. 14:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, cute! Make the nose stand out a little more from the pelt. 15:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Olivenose (A) - Redone
First tortie! I didn't like Ravenpaw, so I moved on to this. Original artist was Icethroat, and the patches needed to be redone Comments? 04:32, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is your first? Wow! Can you make the white match the white on her warrior image. They look a tad different. This is amazing, btw. I think I'll leave the torties to the rest of you. 04:45, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the orange patches just a tad. Not so that they're as bright as the original image, but so they're not so dull. This is amazing for your first tortie! 05:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

No. I really doubt this isn't your first tortie. This is amazing. Lighten the arms and the belly shading - and the muzzle shading. It makes it look like it has blurred lineart. 14:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the shoulder shading/highlight. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 15:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix it when I'm home. And I've done practice torties before, so I should say this is my first tortie for PCA. I don't usually thank people for compliments, but thanks! 17:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (W) - Redone
I was the original artist, and it needed to be long-haired. Comments? <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 15:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Looks wonderful, actually. Can you dull the highlights ever so slightly though? (like, maybe a percentage or two) 15:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- you know where the changes are XD. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 15:40, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the shading a little. 15:56, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks, both of you. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 16:04, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower (A) ~ Redone
OA was Bramble. Comments? 18:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)