Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=For Approval= Take it to the approval page

=Tweaking=

Piketooth (W) ~ Redone
Here's Piketooth, he needed a more realistic pattern, and shading didn't make sense. OA was me, tweaked by Wild and Stoner, I think. I feel redeemed. Changes may or may not be showing. I think shading might need to be defined, so aside from the shading, comments? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 22:03, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading tons and blur the earpink. 22:04, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge his pale underbelly a bit? Bb un   legs  22:12, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 21:57, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more.

Reuploaded. I tried tinting it a bit more, see if that made it more noticeable. Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 00:24, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define exactly where it is, don't darken it, just try to make it unblurred, maybe that will help 00:26, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Add more shading to the back of the shoulder. 4:30 Sun Jun 2 2013

Reuploaded. Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 19:19, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define your light source and thicken the shading 23:08, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 23:59, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

The hindpaw looks pretty good shading wise, but I suggest adding a layer of shading to focus purely on the chest, tail, head, and neck to get the same depth as you have on the hindpaw. It also may be helpful to move the earpink up, dull the the color, and blur it a bit. Love the pattern, Pad! 16:51, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Grazie, Teldy Monkey!~ Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 21:52, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Furzepelt(W) - Redone
OA was 'teldy redone for multiple reasons. I tried to match the other pattern. Comments? 03:50, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Could you add/define the highlight on the feet? They just look a bit flat to your light source. Nice! 15:29, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'd just like to point out, though that highlights are completely optional, and I normally do not use them. x3 16:44, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Littlecloud (Alt. Mc) - Redone
Redone due to multiple issues; oa's were Ivyheart then a tweak by me. Comments?

-cough- Uhm I er... I screwed up and typoed nay as yay on the nomination... I was saying no to a redo, saying a tweak should be plenty... o3o I'm not sure exactly what to do in this case, but I didn't mean yes...

Well, uh, I don't know either... technically it was, but technically it wasn't. Perhaps just let it be for now, and if it shows enough support for it not being redone (or being redone), then we can take it from there? Ivy /did/ vote yes, just making it clear. It was only her comment that was crossed out, not her vote.

Ack, sorry. I didn't read the comment behind it - I just glanced at the voting thingies. I guess just move it back to the nomination page for further voting? 16:27 Mon Jun 3 2013

I think putting it back on the nomination page would be the best idea probably. Technically it was tied, 2 yes and 2 now, whatever the next vote is it would decide it.

Well, the vote has been decided, three yays. I guess this can be here now? 19:58 Wed Jun 5

Berrynose (Alt A) ~ Redone
OAs be Loonie and Howl, redone because the patches were smudged unrealistically. Comments? Bb un   legs  18:09, June 3, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and the patches on the back 00:29, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Decided to tint his shading, too. Bb un   legs  00:33, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Also found some whisker waste, too. Bb un   legs  00:36, June 4, 2013 (UTC)

Possibly lighten the back leg shading some. Or add a highlight, right now they look flat. 03:16, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

The legs furthest from us look blue? Pretty sure they shouldn't really be /blue/. ._. Even with a tint, it shouldn't be that bad.

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  18:48, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Furzepelt (A) - Redone
OAs were Loonie and Shelly. Redone for multiple reasons. Comments? I officially now hate doing shading on apprentice blanks. Dx  17:45, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

She looks really really gray. Lighten the base pelt, perhaps? Or try adding some highlights?

Re-uploaded The base pelt is pure white and she has highlights, but I redid the shading to see if that helped. x3  18:20, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Not sure if I'm seeing the wrong version or not, but she still looks pretty gray. Maybe expan the highlights? 23:33, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:11, June 7, 2013 (UTC)