Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 160

Sorrelpaw (WC) (Star) - Approved
I like you. Also I'll get rid of that waste by your eye later. 12:28, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

Beautiful ^^ Could you smooth out the shading some more? 14:02, 9/23/2016

There's some waste to the left of <- eye. 14:30 Fri Sep 23

She already pointed out the waste, Maple. Also possibly smudge the grey a tad? — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:51, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 12:58, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more. 17:50, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

do you think you could lighten the shading on the body by the tail and on her closest leg (to us) just a little? 15:42, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 09:30, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the close (<) paw?  16:33 Wed Sep 28 

Reups 18:45, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Bluebellkit (Star) - Approved
This is my first charart in a long long time, I've never gotten to do a StarClan kit so I came back to try out my shading skills on a smol bean <3  06:23, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a tiny bit?  08:58 Sat Sep 24 

Define the eye depth just a tad more as well? 14:26, 9/24/2016

expand the shading. 17:49, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you match this image to the kit version? I don't know if it's me but this seems a bit whiter. --Waterclaw135 (talk) 21:37, September 24, 2016 (UTC)

It does match. =/ It's just the shading, which darkness and tint is not required to match from image to image, unless it drastically throws off the coloring.

As per Skye. Technically, you're supposed to use pure white. 21:42, 9/24/2016

some people use an off white, so you don't actually have to. anyway the earpink looks just a litle too bright, maybe dull it down just a tad? 03:43, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading I can't see it. :/ — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 04:08, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used a verrrrrry slight off white and then used pure white for her highlights to create more of the illusion of depth. How's this? 05:06, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

I think there would be shading on the back behind her head if your light source is where I think it is. 12:40, 9/25/2016

Can you define the shading?

Define it as in how? In sharpness or in shade/color? And which side of the neck, <--- this side or ---> this side? 18:16, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

On the back, so ==> side. And I think Spooky means just in general, because I can't make it out very well. 18:01, 9/28/2016

Smol been. QT. Anyways smooth out the shading on the belly. --

reuploaded  04:32, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

So so sorry, but could you define it a bit more? I really can't see it on my laptop or on mobile

I feel as though if I darken it any more, she'll start to look gray, however I could be wrong so if anyone else agrees let me know and I'll do it  03:55, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

It's fine, and not all shading needs to be super defined or dark. CBA?

Approved.

Swiftpaw (TPB) (Alt Kit) - Approved
first inage on this site ) 10:23, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

There's a bit of darker...for lack of a better word: mass...like on the bottom half of his head by his jawline? Idk if that's shading, but it looks a bit out of place. Mind smoothing it out more, or getting rid of it if it's not supposed to be there? 23:30, 9/26/2016

The white looks gray on the ---> part of the body. 16:29, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded The white looks gray because of shading 18:57, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

The weird shading line thing on the chin is still there. 02:45, 9/28/2016

Snow, could you do a redline or something like this for me? Because I don't see it 12:28, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

Sure. Here's the link. The aqua color is where I also found some waste. The red is where the strange darker lines are that I think can be smoothed out more. 13:40, 9/30/2016

Reuploaded Thanks! 18:57, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

Smol kit. CBA?

Approved.

Tree (Ki) - Approved
I believe that I can retake this, since it was withdrawn rather than declined due to one month limit, but if I'm wrong feel free to decline this. 23:24, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more on the chest? 20:53, 10/01/2016

Reuploaded. 21:52, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

You would only not be allowed to take this image had it gotten declined due to the one-month rule. Otherwise, you are very much allowed to take this, and in fact, I'd like to CBA this.

Approved.

Scorchwind (Star) - Approved
I like the eyes. That's the only thing I like about it, but I like the eyes.  10:30 Thu Sep 29 

Smooth the shading. Especially on the chest thing, it looks a little hard to me. --

Reups It's not meant to be super smooth, but I did soften it a lil  23:11 Sat Oct 1 

CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:43, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Approved.