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gray warrior- for evauation
i know theirs no shading going to add it laterWillowstep12 (talk) 13:53, April 10, 2019 (UTC) reuploaded  added the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:42, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try! But can you desaturate the ear and nosepink? It's very neon as is, you should add some darker and lighter shades to the eye for gradient, the shading need darkening, and heavy expansion. Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 15:06, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded is the earpink desaturated anoghtWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add shading and define your light source. I can't tell if there is shading. 16:24 Wed Apr 10

reuploadedWillowstep12 (talk) 17:24, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, and add shading to the back foot closest to us. Connect the shading on the front leg closest to us. There should be more shading depth to the image. 21:36, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also use some smoothing, and shading on the tail either needs to be added or defined, I believe. I think the current earpink darkness is alright, but it could use some desaturation to dull it. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded smoothed shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:50, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed more and the depth needs to be defined, all over. Define it especially on the back paws and tail. Line art appears to be blurred by the tail and front paw closest to us. Could you possibly desaturate the earpink and nose a little too? I think a paler pink would complement the gray better. 18:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

i wont be active for a week so please dont reject thisWillowstep12 (talk) 19:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? You only have a limit of ten days to reupload. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

yeaWillowstep12 (talk) 12:18, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded looks betterWillowstep12 (talk) 12:23, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined and smoothed. Also please add the date for when you reserved this on the table. 17:42, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

oops forgot about the dateWillowstep12 (talk) 12:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more, it looks hard at the edges. Desaturate/darken/lighten the earpink, it looks unnatural for a gray cat. Same goes for the nosepink. You also have (I think) some waste outside < this side of the face, near the whiskers. Good work so far! 22:15, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

There's also some waste at the base of the hip/start of the tail! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  00:04, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw (App)- For Approval
Here he is! Comments? First time trying texture. I freaking love him and his parents. Also, will remove that waste in a moment. 01:41, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:46, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, define the eye depth and add some shine to them as well. The shading appears to be leaking from the shading and on the chest next to the leg line art. Lighten the earpink too, it looks super dark. It also looks like there's some waste by the head. 02:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll fix all these things tomorrow! Ah, I was suspicious something was bugging me. 02:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded will fix more stuffs tomorrow 02:23, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Also, if your light is coming from the front, there some be some light on the fronts of the forelegs and the chest 02:25, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Leaking shading by the belly and haunch, waste by the tail tip and shoulder/neck Malina457 (talk) 03:02, April 11, 2019 (UTC)malina

Try connecting the body texture to the hindleg texture. Right now the Hindleg texture just weirdly cuts off. (Something like this, excuse my sloppiness -> ) Tinystream (talk) 03:30, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

vary the texture slightly more so that it doesnt look as paintbrushy. i suggest using a smudge tool and running it in the direction of fur/drawing more texture lines. in addition, her color looks unrealistically saturated and slightly green. i suggest googling light ginger cats and color picking for a realistic base color 04:29, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw should have shorthair lineart b/c it never said he had long fur--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:07, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

fur length is artist's choice when unstated. 09:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC) Understood--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked off Tree's MCA. Why does that look unrealistic? Malina, can you circle where? 13:05, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

IMO the image looks slightly green. Might be because of the texture/shading, but it could stand to be tweaked


 * I think it also has something to do with the black/blue based shading on top of yellow. I know shading tint is artist's choice but I think you'll have less problems if you used a darker orange or even red on top of yellow 16:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll try to address all of your comments! I learned from reading an archive that red is a good shade for yellow cats (Gooseberry's queen I think). I'll reupload later. Also yep fur length is my choice, I made him to resemble his "weird" father. 22:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:39, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

There’s some waste by the tail and ears! On the edges of the image/canvas. -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:53, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Around the ENTIRE tail. (my bold isnt working, sorry) Malina457 (talk) 00:14, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina

this is turning out better. you need to define the shading everywhere, and also smooth it out on the tail and the belly. it appears that the shading is leaking in some places, which is probably a result of abusing the blur tool. in this case i still highly recommend the smudge tool at 10-20 px to achieve the same effect as the blur tool, but better without the risk of having the shading leaking 00:28, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:25, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading on the backleg furthest from us --

03:36, 4/12/2019

Seems like the shading is leaking on the chest, legs and tail. also can you smooth out the shading on the legs and tail? the texture also needs to follow the fur flow. what you have here looks like it's crisscrossing

Reuploaded redid shading with a lot of smoothing out, will reup for waste in a momento 22:49, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste has been killed via lasso 22:57, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can u define shading on the left side of it's face? Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:31, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any shading with my source there, I think. I'll check my reference image to see if I need to place some there though. 23:50, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading everywhere/define the gradient. 01:11, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded also darkened the shading a bit. 01:40, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

it still needs smoothing out

Reuploaded oh StarClan halp the shading is icky now 02:39, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

not sure if you removed the texture but i can't really see it on my screen? also sorry to be a pain  perhaps the shading could be blurred/smudged/smoothed out more

I did remove the texture- I was struggling with it. I'll blur (and possibly redo) the shading again tomorrow. 05:17, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste will be gone in a jiffy 14:19, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:22, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, define the depth on the chest, and smooth it out slightly on the haunch 01:54, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reuploaded will remove waste later. 14:20, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:43, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

The edges of the shading should be smoothed and can youd define the texture? You said there was texture but I'm not seeing any at all?  Ellie  life is an illusion 16:25, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I said I removed it- look under Moonyy's comment. 16:29, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix that haunch shading. 16:41, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ahh much better *pats Rootpaw* 16:46, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and leg shading. ​

Reuploaded  18:19, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing where the shading has been smoothed out. Could you try smoothing the edges?  Ellie  life is an illusion 15:57, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:05, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light on that front leg (the upper part) and smooth out the shading there

With the approval of Moss, you've been upgraded to an apprentice and this can now say "for approval" ^^ 13:22, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Shading seems to be leaking on the hind leg closest to us, and the front paw furthest away from us. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:45, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a bit on the shoulder, tail, and front paw farthest from us? Dunno if it's just me, but the shading on the front of the body looks darker than the rest. could you either darken the rest of the shading to match that or lighten that area a little? Define the shading in the ears. 15:34, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Also needs blue eyes. 16:19, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Vec! I'll reup later. 22:14, April 16, 2019 (UTC) Wikia will not let me upload him, it doesn't say under the bottom of the file history "Upload a new version of this file". For now, look here for changes. 22:50, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded at last. 22:51, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reuploaded looks like he's in a sunset now. 00:54, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste next to the left ear, the left leg, and in between the hind legs JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:28, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

About depth: you seem to be just darkening the shading in general. the image could still use a thinner, darker layer of shading

Define the eye depth and add some light on the chest

Reuploaded 3 times aghhh Spooky you just said that when I was defining the depth XD. Can you circle where? Will define the eye depth now. 21:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded let's hope I didn't kill his eyes with the burn tool. 21:53, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

The source you seem to be aiming for resembles this; so to where that has light.

Reuploaded  02:24, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

define the light on the legs

Reuploaded  15:18, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

There's still waste floating around, and smooth the shading on the < front leg and chest. The earpink appears rather sharp as well, and I'd recommend checking shading leaking away from the lineart, which is most places.

Reuploaded I'll never get the shading to look right  23:26, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Hi, my name is Potato and I love Rootpaw, Violetshine, and others. I also think shading personally dislikes me and Gaussian Blur is awesome. 00:00, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the haunch and define it on the back paws

Reuploaded how is this, Fox? 23:25, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Pigeonfoot (W) ~ For Approval
ok uhm not sure about this one rip

23:38, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth some? 04:42 Sun Apr 14

Reuploaded

16:48, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the pupil? I'm having a hard time distinguishing it from the eye depth/gradience. 12:50, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

dull the highlights very slightly on the back; almost looks like a diff colored dorsal stripe

Reuploaded

22:18, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:31, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Ouch sorry to be that person, but I feel as if the shading cuts off too abruptly where it stops on the shoulder/arm of the < front leg, perhaps have it extend upwards a bit more and taper off smoother. I also feel as if the shading on the white is a touch too dark, and the eyes could have more of the lighter color for depth, to match the app.

Reuploaded

14:37, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

The tail shading on the underside of the ^ part of the tail is leaking into the v part of the tail, if that makes sense. It looks like there's a jagged line of gray on the white that's not supposed to be there. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  05:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

14:24, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading to the top of the shoulder, and the very bottom of the chest? Still looks like it cuts of abruptly. 12:51, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Plumstone (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

For some reason wikia isn't showing jt but from the discord inage, her design should match File:Plumstone.apprentice.png also be sure to not thumb images as it messes with the format. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:31, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and dull the ear/nosepink, as it looks rather neon. 06:23, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does it look now? 00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

She has to match her apprentice. The body is facing a different direction granted, but the Head still the same direction and some of the side the Apprentice shows is visible. You must match her colors to that as they do not match up right now, and match basic patch placement, and smoothness. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 11:37, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, smudge the patches, and smooth out the shading. 22:03, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I used #dd983d for the patches mixed with #844711, and black with a low opacity. #553c33 for the earpink. Eyes should be amber, base for that is #dca864 I think. The black base is just pure black. The patches need to be rougher and thinner. Nose color is #1e1616. 01:03, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the colours, Patch. I redid the whole thing.

Expand, define, and smooth out the shading. For the shading use a dark tint, like blue or red. Then run the blur tool or smudge tool over it to make it look pretty. You can also go to Filters>Blur>Gaussian Blur, the best way to get the shading looking smooth. Smudge the patches a lot more in the direction of the fur as well. 21:42, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll blur the shading and I'll define the ear depth and eye depth.

Reuploaded. What about now?

Better. However, please expand the shading more, and define it. Her patches are lighter, sharper, and smaller. 22:12, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Some more patches should be added as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:34, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

You've still got time, but are you still working? 17:39, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Thriftpaw (A) - For Evaluation
Didn't know what her eye color was, so I just guessed. Hope that's ok? --Pondleaf (talk) 12:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try, but first of all your heading is actually incorrect as it needs either for approval or for Evaluation. I can't find you on the projects table so idk if this should be approval or evaluation but if needed someone can fix it. Second, your file names incorrect, we've got a file naming format! It should be File:Thriftpaw.apprentice.png rather than what you have. Also, could you define all the shading? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:35, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I've also added you to the reservation table. Make sure to claim the image you want and date it before posting another artwork to the approval page! 13:00, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 13:02, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

You need to match her kit, i still have the file if you need it. 13:43, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Okay, can I have the file then? --Pondleaf (talk) 07:02, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, do you have an email or discord I can send it to? 21:11, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

no rush, but are you still working?

01:34, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Cloud (Storm) (Alt. E)- For Approval
Comments? I might need to smooth out the shading, I'll do that tomorrow. 02:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

there's a bit of waste behind the head

next to the ear too actually. also there appears to be shading leaking around the haunch/underbelly area.

The shading should be smoothed too and it wouldn't hurt tk add a tad more depth. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

define light more on the front paws please. --

06:39, 4/17/2019

Reuploaded  23:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the front leg. smooth out the shading on the haunch and add depth everywhere

can you also define the shading on the ear? <span style="">02:40 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded  21:42, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

smudge the pelt into the earpink and the shading is still really blotchy. Also, most of the shading suggests that the light is coming from over the back, but the face and the placement of the light in the eye suggests that it's coming from the front 06:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste next to the ear

Reuploaded tried with the shading depth, how does this look? 21:38, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, rump and the space between the belly and tail I think. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded should be gone now! 02:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading --

16:02, 4/20/2019

Reuploaded how is dis, Silver? 17:02, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste by the tail, legs and head! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  01:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste-free! 02:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. 03:19, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded how's this? 03:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it on the legs and flank, and define it on the face? 13:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice also defined the tail's light. There is already shading on the face, it's below the ear closest to us. 15:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed more, pretty much everywhere, save for the head. There appears to be shading leaking on the tail, belly, and limbs. Can you also define the shading on the one paw furthest from us and inside the ear?

I'll work on this soon. Who said that, btw? 22:55, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Patch said it, the power of history logs! 00:33, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and smooth the shading you erased on the tail and front paws? Every time you erase shading, you're gonna want to smooth it out. ^^ 12:50, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded green shading is sometimes no but today is yes 23:14, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Frondwhisker (W) - For Approval
Shading looks horrendous but I guess we'll see. The colors are taken from the apprentice.

19:42, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the back foot. Also smooth out the shading a little? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:33, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. 22:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:31, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice stripes seem thicker, could you thicken them? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:35, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:45, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the facial shading some? <span style="">02:42 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded

03:12, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the pale parts rougher and make the pale marks over her eyes more pointy? Her tail also needs some pale. She needs some more stripes on the leg closest to us and on her chest, to match what i had on the kit. Could you maybe make the texture rougher too? it looks a bit too soft (i used the pencil tool to make it) the stripes on the face could be rougher too. the stripes on the forehead are also more like a half circle on the bottom, then two other halves of a circle on the edges. I have no idea if that makes sense so if you need me to explain further or a redline for that let me know. 03:50, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you? It'd be easier for me that way.

03:59, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

sort of like half a circle with an "M" she also needs three little dots below her eyes. here's her kit with just the stripes, as a reference for her leg and face stripes, if that helps. 04:15, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

23:34, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The texture is very pencil-ey and hard edged. Could you soften it?

Reuploaded

21:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the hind leg? And I think the black on her nose should be expanded to touch the lines of her nose if I'm not mistaken. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  12:41, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:38, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the haunch to curve along the back, and shade the little triangle/back leg, as it'd more than likely be in shadow.

Better?

20:19, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if this is needed but could you make the texture a bit more subtle? Just reduce the opacity by a tad. 15:51, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

The texture currently matches the kit & apprentice, not sure if it needs to be changed in that regard.

18:19, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Troutclaw (E) - For Approval
I wanted a challenge! .. and anime hair. im only in it for thE HAIR. I referenced and colorpicked the star. i dont think i matched the stripes very great tho?? but if you have suggesstions on that please do ill probably fiddle with those tomorrow. i sure got that challenge. i think i can have this and flutterkit bc this is a redo? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 02:07, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! The stripes appear a tad sharper/rugged on the star. Maybe try using a very small eraser and stroke horizontally on the edges? 12:17, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 12:39, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, will re-up soon as I can. I've finally almost got the stripes to a point I like them more. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:52, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

reups i think this should match a bit nicer if I did it right. also sorry for delay next reups will be faster <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:41, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Dawncloud (E) ~ For Approval
redid this, because I could not make heads or tails of how to even begin tweaking it

CBA?

Sorry to break CBA, could you actually expand the shading on the haunch? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:06, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm gonna reupload this later but will do.

Just gonna nudge to see if you're still working, Star?

unfortunately I am busy and will not be back at my computer until Saturday. sorry.

Rain (E) ~ CBA
I forgot how i did his toeh lol --

07:55, 4/19/2019

Define the shading on the legs and tail a bit more? 14:58, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --

16:43, 4/19/2019

With your light source, the belly shading should be on the <-- side not the -->. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:08, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

reups --

09:25, 4/20/2019

Can you smooth the shading on the back and belly?

Reups --

09:37, 4/22/2019

add depth to the eye Willowstep12 (talk) 12:20, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

his eye is meant to be gone, i dont understand what you mean --

13:50, 4/22/2019

What Willowstep means is that since the eye is gone there should be depth to make it look like a hole, not a flat surface. Similar to One-eye's image. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:58, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

That can be fixed by adding some scar tissue and shading there, that should give it depth <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --

09:00, 4/23/2019

CBA? 12:48, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) ~ For Approval
Comments? 16:17, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart just slightly on the tummy^^

Reuploaded. 23:11, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading, it seems to rough especially for the transition from the light to the shading. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the haunch a bit more? 20:01, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the earpink and the depth of it on the front paws?

Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Brokenstar (Alt. E) - CBA
smoosh floof. also I know it doesn't match the DF, but I have that up for tweak nom to darken it. I can match it for now if I need to just lmk <span style="">20:22, 04/20/2019

Are you matching Scarlet's lineart? I can't tell. Define the earpink a tad? 21:45, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Uh I don't have to match lineart. Reuploaded. <span style="">22:13, 04/20/2019

Uh from what I know you have to match lineart. I was made to match Burnt's Slash lineart. It should match Scarlet's. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:58, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I was told I did not have to match the line art. I spoke to multiple leads about it. There are a few other lineart tweaks that do not match between regular and alt as well; Brokenstar’s dark forests, Thistleclaw’s dark forests are two examples. <span style="">03:36, 04/21/2019

I think it's fine. --

04:16, 4/21/2019

I was told before I withdrew Poppydawn's alt by Jayce I had to match Scarlet's lineart for Poppydawn's elder above since she posted it first. Scarlet posted Brokenstar's elder first, so you should probably match hers, Ferk. 15:39, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

If they spoke to the leads about it, and they were fine, this is fine Malina457 (talk) 16:10, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

It is indeed fine as is. If you would - could you define the shading depth on the front leg closest to us?

I personally think Ferk should match the lineart, especially since Potato was told to match very recently but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. Could you lighten the shading in the area behind the head, or maybe decrease the depth there? Almost looks like a dark blob. 03:26, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reup <span style="">19:26, 04/23/2019

As per Spooky, this lineart is fine. Potato, you were told to match Scarlet's because you tried to guilt-trip her into matching yours, which you were completely in the wrong, and to prevent you from having to tweak the lineart in future uploads, since I saw you were having problems. I did it to make it easier for you. Regardless, I was one of the leads who gave Ferk permission to create her own lineart. It's perfectly acceptable, and others have gotten away with it in the past. ​

honestly imo there really shouldnt be double standards– it should be either all or none. i think she should match scarlet's linear art 02:10, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

I disagree, lineart has never really needed to match before, and in potato's case it was strictly for conduct reasons. I think it should stay as is Malina457 (talk) 18:31, April 24, 2019 (UTC)malina

I have to agree with burnt, I was made to match burnt's liineart when I asked about the Slash alt. So I hoknestly think the lineart should match. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:56, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

lineart has never been a requirement to match with ragged fur. none of you shouldve been made to match in those cases. 22:23, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

and with that in mind im cbaing this. 22:30, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

then i think that then there really needs to be clear guidelines on it, otherwise this will just rinse and repeat in the future. minkclaw was made to match slash and potato was amde to match poppydawn while ferk doesnt need to– the rules cant be bent for certain people. its unfair. 23:18, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Havenpelt (Q) - For Approval
Honestly I'm not really happy with this. Tinystream (talk) 23:05, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing the image? Could reup it? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:47, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Darken shading and define the light <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:48, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reup I may have to redo the white. Tinystream (talk) 01:28, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the light on the forepaws, they're looking quite grey at the moment

Judging by her apprentice, the eyes need to be a darker green. These look pale teal tbh. 02:44, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Her eyes are green? I though they were blue... Either way, I'm not sure if I can change it since I colorpicked it from the apprentice.. Tinystream (talk) 21:02, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like the apprentice to me imo Malina457 (talk) 00:56, April 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

Eyes look fine and sometimes Wikia washes out blue/green colours. 11:42 Tue Apr 23 2019

Could you smooth out the transitions between the white and black? And add some, faint, shading to the front paws. There at least be some. 12:48, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Rain (Alt.E) ~ For Approval
I have no idea of the light source so if I need to fix it, please be specific of where exactly to adjust/add shading.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, there shouldn't be any shading on the back. See Cloud (my art). She has a similar source to this. 02:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Actually from the way it seems, there shohld be back shading as it looks as though its coming from the --> <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:09, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Yes it's meant to be coming from top -> so I think a little bit of back shading is needed.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:26, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

I'd still recede it some on the back. Some is needed, but I don't think that much is. Also, shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart on the belly and the front legs could use light definition

Reupload<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  04:20, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe add some more shading on the shoulder? <--- portion of it. 12:46, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Dappletuft (W) - For Approval
nice <span style="">04:25 Sun Apr 21

Either remove or lessen the shading on the tail tip. it looks like a flat object with the tail tip being covered entirely

reuploaded <span style="">17:47 Sun Apr 21

Could you expand the shading on the back and tail a bit more? It's looking very slim imo. And add some more depth too 03:16, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">17:11 Mon Apr 22

I'm a bit confused by your shading source on the tail. I see shading on the top and bottom of it? If its coming from where i thinm it is, some of the top needs removed. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:09, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hows this? <span style="">21:28 Mon Apr 22

There's a bit of white on the top of the tail that's leaked over from the haunch, and the white on the > front leg appears quite gray (might be difficult to tackle, though, so if it's not possible dw)

reuploaded i defined the light source on that leg so hopefully that fixed the gray issue <span style="">01:35 Wed Apr 24

Could you smooth the shading on the gray? 12:45, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded this is about all the smoothing I can do <span style="">18:48 Wed Apr 24

Featherpelt (Q) ~ CBA
ugh i suck at matching tabby patterns

^ colour picked from the apprentice, tried to match that and the kit but none of her images seem to show this side well enough, hope it's okay? :/

Yeah, it's perfectly ok to make up the side that isn't showing. ^^ As long as the overall pattern matches. And could you make the stripes a bit thicker on the bottoms where they end (not the tapered tip)? 03:15, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

not quite sure what you mean, vec? do i taper the tips or make them more blunt? i think the apprentice's stripes are sharp... ?

I guess I'm kinda saying to add some more variety to the stripes thickness. It's very linear right now. Something maybe like this? Thicker on some of the ends, very fine at the tips. I was referencing the apprentice's stripes when doing this. 12:32, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

aah i see what you mean. thanks, i’ll reup in the morning

reups i tried? stripes with a mousepad are a pain > ><  <

CBA? 12:45, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Fringewhisker (W) - For Approval
so. tortoiseshells. 20:45, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Uh from what her page says she's spose to be white with brown spltoches? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:57, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

It matches the apprentice Mink, except for the face patch, please recede it to the mid nose, its white there, good job though! Malina457 (talk) 21:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

On the loner and apprentice the pattern is much less smudged than what you have. 21:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The face placement actually looks alright in my opinion, but maybe move the white on the cheek up a little bit? Sorry if this is a repeat comment 21:52 Sun Apr 21 2019

Ok maybe I was seeing an old version?? Cause now it looks fine, my apologies XD Malina457 (talk) 22:06, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

Re-Uploaded! I've been trying for a bit now but if it still doesn't match, I'll work on it tommorow! 22:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the body shading just a tad? so cute!! <span style="">01:04 Mon Apr 22

There are three shades on brown on the image. You've got two of them that's darker and lighter, and another that's more grayish. There's supposed to be some white flecks on ---> portion of the face. I don't know if Jayce already offered you, but would you like one of the files? I did her kit a while back, and trust me, it really helped. ^^ 03:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I honestly have not had the time to offer the file, but I'm always willing to send one to someone if they need it. (provided I remember to do so lmao)

Re-Uploaded! I think this is better? If it's not the file might be helpful ;w;  19:24, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure on this, but does this have texture, or is that textured shading? Also, there should be white "flecks" scattered throughout the pelt. ​​​​​

Re-Uploaded! And it's textured shading with a tiny bit of texture 12:45, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Please remove the texture, as the other images don't have it. While texture is always artist's choice, if the other images in the set don't have it, you aren't allowed to add it to whichever image you're doing. ​​​

Re-Uploaded! I got rid of my texture layer, but if the shading is too much, I can smooth it out! 18:58, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more white to ---> front paw? The brown is supposed to be only covering the right side of it. 12:44, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Dodge (Le) - For Approval
We shall see. 07:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you tweak his muzzle to look more flattened as he’s described? For inspiration, you could look at Brokenstar’s leader if that helps 10:32 Mon Apr 22 2019

Reuploaded - Tweaked the eyes per discord suggestion, and attempted a flatter muzzle appearance. 11:11, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you give the shading on the <-- sidenof his body a bitnof curve so it doesn't appear like a straight line? As I beleive it would be more curved due to the light source im seeing? Good job on this <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:23, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Taper the scar at the ends a tad? Looks a little paintbrushy there. 12:16, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Curved shading and attempted to adjust the scarring a bit more! Thanks for the compliments 12:44, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more? Looks a tad hard at the edges. 23:23, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Softened the earpink and smudged it in a tiny bit. 23:44, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Is there a paler underside on the tail, or is it hidden by shading? The tail stripes also appear different imo. They appear thicker and more spaced out with fewer of them on the rogue and old leader. Could you also add the paler muzzle, too? 12:42, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Paled the underside of the tail and fixed the striping to the best of my ability. The muzzle is already paler but it's difficult to tell due to the nature of the shading to give the flattened snout appearance. =) 14:06, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Conefoot (W) ~ For Approval
Color picked from the apprentice! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  17:06, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

The patches need to be sharper, per the apprentice image. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm just from the files, since the earpink is darker because of shading coverage on the app; the color should be #i875e5d beneath everything, which should be just a touch lighter than this. Also, I believe there's some shading leaking away from the lineart on both back feet.

Can you smooth out the shading on the flank/side? There looks to be a sharp line through it. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  21:34, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

could you also smooth out the tail shading a bit? <span style="">19:42 Tue Apr 23

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  21:32, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

You have waste outside the tail and < these whiskers. 22:12, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Apprentice does have a little gray on the top of the head, and the gray on the back should go lower to have only just the belly as white. The gray additionally doesn't stretch all the way up the neck, leading to the head - it should cut off before the shoulderblade.

Reuploaded! Like that? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  00:00, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the gray- it's really hard-edged and does not match the apprentice (was this rude? sorry if it was). 00:02, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:18, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Mmkay.. the gray is beginning to turn a tad yellow. Can you fix that? Also, I think you oversmudged the gray tad, so perhaps sharpen the edges of it? Sorry for being so nitpicky.. ;) 00:32, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

I also feel like the gray is overblurred. 12:30, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! This is the bane of my existence -Shadow   hOnK :o)  01:35, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Breezeheart (W) ~ CBA
based off my kitty; all of them have been wiki immortalized

can you define the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:02, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? 19:56, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Lizardfang (E) ~ CBA
boop 23:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget his tooth! 00:19, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The tooth is on the other side according to the star...would it even be visible on this side? 00:32, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

i don't think the tooth would be visible here. could you possible add a tiny bit of shading at the bottom of the right shoulder? i feel like there'd be a bit because you have shading along the bottom for most of his body

Bottom right...but there is shading there? Did you want me to define it? 12:46, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

yes, i think expand it a little more

Reups 13:58, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Lichenfur (E) - For Approval
I have returned! I missed you all so much, but I probably could have picked an easier design to come back with, eek! 00:02, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

the mottles on her loner seem more blurred. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:01, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reup -- 22:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

It appears as if the mottles should extend all the way to the tailtip, per the other image

Shellheart (E) - For Approval
I made the pattern closer to the StarClan, it didn't really match well before. <span style="">00:24 Tue Apr 23

It looks lovely! Could you smoothen out the shading on the face and left of the shoulder? 22:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Baykit (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay, my son is done. im probably gonna have to either darken or light the face/booty shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:39, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Hm, this looks more ginger then golden imo. maybe make the base a bit more yellow. and smooth the shading on the hind leg and tail.

10:30, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you expand then lighten the shading everywhere? 11:21, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

I think its fine the colors that is, as I used Star Flower's colors as an example (color picked from her and all) and she's a golden tabby. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:38, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

I have to agree with Ari, I wonder if it's the shading that's doing it... She seems a bit more orange than golden. Also, smooth out the shading everywhere, lighten it a bit on the neck, and don't forget to expand it on the tail.

Hm.. I'll fiddle with it and see if I can fix that then. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:47, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Curlfeather (Q) - For Approval
Couldn't find any other chararts on her page so did whatever. 01:36, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

warrior and kit are here, please match them. Since I'm still around and the OA of the warrior, I'd like to keep the set the style it currently has. ​

Reuploaded - Fixed everything. Copied every colour and every layer percentage of the warrior. Hopefully this looks good! 03:11, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading and add depth to it as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:00, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you make the texture on the main body curve more along the flank so that it doesnt look as flat? 11:21, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source, the face and tail suggest -> whilst the body looks other wise. Removing the shading from the back would probably fix the issue 11:38 Tue Apr 23 2019

Can you define the pupils? -- 22:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to keep as close as possible to the OA's, but put in the changes requested. 23:20, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you make it so that the texture flows naturally on the main body? criss crossing looks unnatural and doesn't match the other images

Reuploaded - Realised the mistake. I forgot to change the secondary texture. 23:30, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Dusk Nose (Hunter) ~ For Approval


The white on the paws shoukd either be removed or darkened to a cream color considering she isn't cited with any white. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:47, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

It is cream.

Due to its contrast with the rest of her pattern though, it appears white - might I suggest making it a similar ginger to what you already have? (I’m not sure what the ruling is so forgive me if I’m suggesting something unneeded) 11:37 Tue Apr 23 2019

Re-uploaded

Could you smooth the shading on the > side of the belly and on the > backside of the cat / > side of the haunch area?

Re-uploaded

Patchpelt (E) ~ For Approval
13:17, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

on the star the black seems more smudged

The warrior and previous elder were done before the StarClan, and they don't seem as smudged as the StarClan image. I think it's good as-is.

Feather of Flying Hawk (Ki) - For Approval
I now regret giving them texture and I plan to mess with the shading but... here's my nb child. All colors from the to-be. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:58, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Minor changes. Juniperbriar (talk) 18:23, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Might you define the shading on the tail? ​​​

Maybe define the shading behind the shoulder? 12:33, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Going to mess with the shading more. It looked fine in SAI but it looks blotchy here. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:27, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Raven Pelt (D) ~ CBA
My screen refuses to allow me to see dark colors so I have no idea what this even looks like, but hopefully it's good. 19:20, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading? i can hardly see it on my super bright screen (yeet) 23:22, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:46, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

can you add some shading depth/darken the shading further? 07:16, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. shading is black on 100% opacity now. 16:42, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Skywatcher (E) - For Approval
22:19 Tue Apr 23 2019

Heavystep (E) - For Approval
not to sure about this one - also all hail the undying 22:19 Tue Apr 23 2019

Defien teh shading on the face, legs, and chest a tad. 23:24, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded darkened it because its the same shading i've used for the other elders lol 23:28 Tue Apr 23 2019

Gullswoop (W) - CBA
aaa I just love her name! 22:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Lean tabby with torn ear (W) - For Approval
Tried some new things. Going to mess with the shading. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:05, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:06, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

I bet this was meant to be like... a mistake for Boulder or something lmao. Anyways, could you define the shading in <- ear? Super minor, I know, I apologize. ​

Reuploaded It's alright, I was planning to do it anyway lol - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:44, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Violetshine (Alt. W) - For Approval
pulled all the colors from her alt. rogue image 00:55, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Scarlet.. this is pretty.. but this does not count as a LS character or minor character, and will be redone in June. If this stays up, expand the earpink. 01:21, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

This is an original image, Potato, not a redo, there's no reason why it cant be on here now. 01:47, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Now I get it, thanks for clearing that up! 02:28, April 24, 2019 (UTC)


 * The earpink is fine. It's actually larger then some of my other approved warriors. It looks smaller because of the shading 21:04, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Pine That Clings to Rock (CG) - For Approval
Kit's mine, so I changed the colors and gave him his father's eyes.

Needs mud on the fur maybe? Tybaxel (talk) 16:47, April 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Yeah, that I know. I'll add it once I get this shading down; I'm not good with larger blanks and I want to make sure I get that down before I add mud.

Might I suggest curving the haunch shading a tad more, and having the paws completely in shadow? Then I think you’d be all good to add the mud :D 17:22 Wed Apr 24 2019

Spotfur (W) - For Approval


i’m assuming i can post this now? i’m very sorry about posting it before, i misinterpreted the rules 😓 Tybaxel (talk) 20:55, April 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Can I just say, I love this lol. Maybe smooth out the haunch shading? Malina457 (talk) 00:29, April 25, 2019 (UTC)malina