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Waspwhisker (KP) -Redone
The texture was a pain, and it was hard to make it as gawjus as the warrior charart, and I think I failed. xDD Not sure if changes are showing. 22:19, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white?

Re-uploaded  22:06, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on his front leg and haunch? Maybe lighten it on the paws since the white is beginning to look gray. 23:02, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  01:13, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

There's a tad of waste under the front paw and to --> side of the head. Nice Work Thistle. c: 07:52 Thu Apr 18

The highlights are a bit bright, tone them down some? 00:22, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It wasn't waste, it was bits of lineart that turned gray somehow o.O 22:37, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his front leg a tad. 23:17, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:30, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

He's got odd shiny spots everywhere...fix that? c: 06:58 Tue Apr 23

White looks somewhat gray...unless that's just how you shaded?

What do you mean shiny spots? @Berry o.o 20:32, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

oh, and @Skye, I had the white a bit brighter before but they were too bright I think so I toned them down a tad, but if you want them brighter I can do that again. 16:26, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Stone Song (P3) (SC) - Tweaked
OA was Flamingomom3, tweaked to define shading. Suggestions for improvement for Stone Song? 22:41, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

He looks a bit shiny. 22:44, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Highlights. Toned 'em down. 00:37, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Idk quite how to put this but the light flow looks weird... Like there's no shadows between muscles 00:48, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I see what you mean...I think that fixed it. 19:50, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

He still looks a bit shiny, though it could just be my screen. 21:14, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  I'm a bit reluctant to get rid of the highlights (his paws and face look flat then), but I toned them down more. 19:24, April 26, 2013 (UTC)

Sneezepaw(A) - Tweaked
White needed whitened, OA is Icy. All I did is seperate the lineart, dodge the white, and add a bit of shading to the white. Comments? 21:13, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

I see some white dots on his haunch and chest. Remove those, please? Bb un   legs  21:16, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

I don't see any. O.o  21:19, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

I do; on the haunch. Just run the smudge/blur tool over that area a bit and I'm sure it'll go away. 02:43 Sun Apr 28

Mudclaw (WC) (W) - Tweaked
OA was Appledash, tweaked stripes to match better. Comments? 10:56 Sat Apr 27