Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Thornclaw (Alt Ki) - Declined
Redone for multiple reasons OA is me. 18:33, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes look a tad bit more like just pixels... maybe have the blur settings really low and try bluring them just a smidge?

Still working, Duck?

If you manage to upload today, mind expanding the shading? 7:26 Sat Sep 14 2013

Sorry, Duck. I gotta decline this. ;-; I'll take over.

Jay (KP) ~ Tweaked
[ruins another image] 00:19, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

re-uploaded got the file from snowman hehe 00:39, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

could you deefine the shading a bit? 7:24 Sat Sep 14 2013

re-uploaded also added a bit more manginess whatever you'd call it 07:53, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it could take some more mange~ nice job! I think she needs some Clairol and detangling spray. She could use some extensions, too XD 16:46 Sat Sep 14

Eh, she looks pretty good to me. I don't want to see Jay /that/ mangled up. ;_;

[mangles her up even more] Nah, since she's a kittypet, I think the manginess would be more limited than it would be on a feral cat. 23:34, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Bramblestar (A) - Redone
Most recent oa was Oblivion, redone to match better. Comments? 01:21 Sat Sep 14

Maybe add a few more stripes? 20:29, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it'll look a little too crowed, and won't match as well. 21:51 Sat Sep 14

Cinderheart (A) - Redone
Comments? Redone to be a smoke tabby. 18:46 Sat Sep 14 2013

I absolutely adore this, Rae! However, I think you could lighten the shading a teeny tiny bit, and lighten the blue of the eyes (It looks more dark indigo).

Reuploaded. Eyes are fine, though. Same color as the warrior. 20:33 Sat Sep 14 2013

Nicely done Rae! I'd say the shading's just right now. Sorry about the eye thing, I wasn't thinking.

Crowfeather (W) - Redone
next on: splook can't match things worth crap. Most recent OA was me. redone for smoke things. 19:14 Sat Sep 14

go here for the changes:  19:16 Sat Sep 14

I like it but the coloring is far too dark, could you lighten it? Or if it's the shading, could lighten you that instead? The texture also doesn't look like the loner image/app image's textures. (God, I'm not that good at chararts and look at me - criticizing an experienced user's work xD)

Would you like the.xcf? 19:35 Sat Sep 14

Reuploaded. I lightened him up a bit so you can see the texture a bit better, let me know if it still needs to be improved. Raven: if I end up struggling quite a bit with the colors, I'll ask you for it. Thanks! :) 22:04 Sun Sep 15

I find it doesn't really match the loner well, as the texture seems off. 00:29, September 16, 2013 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt A) ~ Redone
Redone as stripes were icky, but really I thought I coud do better. OA be me~ 22:33, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

This needs five votes to pass, not three. =P You can repost once it gets the other two it needs, okay?

Oh, okay. Sorry. It's just that I looked on the archives and I saw some passed with three. c: 23:08, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

It's reached 5. c: 23:56, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Define shading on the closest back leg. 00:35 Sun Sep 15

Reups 00:55, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a bit more, especially on that front shoulder/leg? 01:03, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

I think its fine, but I'll change it if anyone else agrees. 01:06, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

And I'll be that someone else that agrees. o3o Heh.

Reups 04:09, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Could you perhaps thicken the stripes/define a bit? o3o 22:21, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Quailheart (W) - Redone
Redone due to multiple reasons, oa was me. Comments? 00:35 Sun Sep 15

Oooh...Nice textures Raven! I think you should tone down the highlights on the shoulder just a little and blur spots a bit.

Dovewing (Ki) ~ Redone
OA be Skype, redone for smoke. Comments? 23:35, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

re-up removed some specks of waste 23:47, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Define the smoke; it looks like she just has pale markings 00:28, September 16, 2013 (UTC)