Warriors Wiki talk:Books/Discussion Archive 16

Into the Wild - Quote Change
I'm also proposing a quote change for Into the WIld. The quote, "You cannot live with a paw in each world," doesn't describe the book. Rusty's fear of leaving his Twolegs didn't last long. I have more quotes that might fit the book better, but if anypony disagrees, state so now.

1. "You look like a brand of fire in this sunlight. You have fought well. From this day forward, until he has earned his warrior name, this apperntice will be called Firepaw, in honor of his flame colored coat." Bluestar, page 37.

2. "Well, I hope you'll think twice about bringing strays into the camp next time. Like I said, outsidesr always bring trouble." - Longtail sneering at Firepaw at 101.

3. "The Clan may not be able to offer you such easy food or warmth. In the season of leaf-bare, nights in the forest can be cruel. The Clan will demand great loyalty and hard work. You will be expected to protect your Clan with your life if necessary. And there are many mouths to feed. But the rewards are great. You will remain a tom. You will be trained in the ways of the wild. You will learn what it is like to be a real cat. The strength and the fellowship of the Clan will always be with you, even when you hunt alone." Bluestar backing up her reasons for asking Firepaw to join her Clan, page 23.

4. "Perhaps you should find out these things for yourself. Would you like to join ThunderClan?" Bluestar, 21.

I've came up with these as I read the book - I'm not finished with it, but when I have, I might post some more. I also believe 3 could be the main quote. Comments? 01:55, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Three is really good, it explains the clans. 02:01, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Number three. o.o 02:05, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, number three. I don't even think you really need to find anymore quotes. xD Feel free to do so if you please, though.

I'm in love with number 3. Four is good as well. 18:51, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

I love number 3. 23:16, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Number 3 is the best.-- 23:29, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

CBV?

Midnight - Quote Change
I'm here today because I feel that the quote for Midnight should be change. For one, it has nothing to do with the book - it actually has to deal with Dawn. And though I could care less about spoilers, I know a majority of the Wiki does, so...it spoils who Midnight is. I'm going to list quotes I feel would be better. (No offense to who nominated the quote).

1."A new prophecy has come! A doom that will change everything has been foretold in the stars." - Bluestar, page 1. It's not stated that this is Bluestar, but, I have proof and if you need it, tell me.

2."Darkness, air, water, and sky will come together and shake the forest to its roots. Nothing will be as it is now, nor as it has been before." - Bluestar, page 2.

3."A time of trouble is coming to the forest. A new prophecy must be fulfilled if the Clans are to survive. You have been chosen to meet with three other cats at the new moon, and you must listen to what midnight tells you." - BLuestar to Brambleclaw, page 8.

4."Maybe it's your time now. Remember that StarClan doesn't like to make things obvious. They send us prophecies, but they never tell us exactly what to do. They expect us to show courage and loyalty to achieve what has to be done, just as Firestar did." Ravenpaw to Brambleclaw, page 95.

5."Squirrelpaw, I want you to go out with Thornclaw." Firestar to Squirrelpaw, 117. 19:19, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

I love that last quote....xDDDD

Anyways, I personally think these quotes offer a better selection than what we have on the page. They're not spoilerish, but provide a key tune in to the plot. I'd probably pick the one Bluestar says to Brambleclaw. I like it.

I forgot to say the one I wanted. xD I would like either the Bluestar quote on page 2 or the page 8 quote...or the last one. 19:25, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Numbers 3, 4, or 6 xD. 19:58, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

I like the page 2 one from Bluestar, the page 8 one, and the last one...xD 18:54, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Number 1, though my favorite is the last one XD. Unfortunately,that doesn't work with the book. -- 18:56, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

The last ones great (sadly it took me a moment to get it), but I like 3 and 4. 14:45, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

CBV?

The Clans Decide - Quote Nomination
I like 3 and 6, if you want me to get more I will, Comments? 04:03, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) "Stop poking your muzzle in where it's not wanted, Firestar, and let us deal with these trespassers." Russetfur to Firestar; Page 2
 * 2) "These cats are scared and starving, just like us. Peace will catch no prey." Sandstorm to Firestar; Page 6
 * 3) "Come back, make them see sense. Not all of us want to keep living like this, killing ourselves for the last piece of prey." Mosspelt to Firestar; Page 6
 * 4) "StarClan has come!" Otterheart to the rest of the Gathering; Page 8
 * 5) "Stop thinking about battles for once in your life!" Graymist to Snaketail; Page 9
 * 6) "Of all the medicine cats Firestar had known, none had frightened him. But sometimes, Jayfeather did. Firestar's thoughts; Page 10
 * 7) "You saved my life once before, in the flood. I believe you can do it again." Reedwhisker to Firestar; Page 12
 * 8) "Don't you dare vote against yourself! If you, lose it must not be because you didn't believe you could do this." Sandstorm to Firestar; Page 13
 * 9) "You are this Clan's leader, and no other's." Dustpelt to Firestar; Page 13
 * 10) "The vote has been cast, the cats have chosen to follow firestar." Jayfeather at the end of the vote; Page 13
 * 11) "I promise I will be guided by the warrior code, and most of all, by StarClan's wish that there should be four clans. If that means sharing our fresh-kill, so be it. We will do what we have to in order to survive-just as we have always done." Firestar to the rest of the gathering; Page 14

I think the quote at the end of the book would seem more fitting. 18:47, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you get one or two more, Duck? 18:51, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Edit conflict Leggy...lolwhut Lol, I love 6<33 3 is good as well. 18:52, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

OK, I added four more. 20:04, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

10 or 11. 20:07, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I like 11. Seems a bit spoiler-ish...but it works, I'd say.

I like 11, as well. You can't always have perfect, spoiler-free quotes that actually grasp the concept of a book. 18:40, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There hasn't been any comments the past few days, so CBV? 20:52, June 22, 2012 (UTC)