Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 20

Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
Added longer tail. Original artist was Sandy, redone by Scarlet. Comments? Elorisa  18:24, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks a little odd... When I added it to the list, I pictured it being expanded at the middle, so that it was roughly the same shape, but longer. Make sense? 18:28, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded; Better? ''' Elorisa   18:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, perfect :) 18:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip of the tail a bit pointier and erase the waste around the tail. 22:45 Sun Nov 13

Are you still working on this, Elorisa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:06, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

If she's not going to work on it, I'll glady take over. I love playing with the lineart on images. =) 08:09, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it, I just haven't gotten around to reuploading it. I'll have it uploaded either later today or tommorow. -- Elorisa   20:10, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded... -- Elorisa   16:07, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip pointier and the line on the tail closest to the back a bit smoother, it's a bit jagged right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:25, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

The tail sort of looks... broken? Perhaps make it a bit smoother. How? I'm not that sure. -- 00:51, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by 'broken', Splashy? -- Elorisa   01:06, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look.. right. Maybe make the curve bigger at the top. The curve in the tail isn't really in the right place currently. 03:25 Wed Nov 23

The curve is in almost the same general area as the regular warriors blank, but it's longer x.x. -- Elorisa   19:47, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

24 Hours - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) - Redone
I had permission to re-do this. I re-did the stripes, re-did the shading, and eliminated some blurred lineart that was on the previous image. The OA was Nightshine, and tweaked by me. 04:17, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! However (and I know this is almost nit-picky) but it appears you have three different kind of tabbies going on here, and genetically, that is not possible. 04:31, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

I like the stripes! They looks a bit like speckles on the face though, maybe make them a bit linger and bigger? Also, blur the ones on the body ever so slightly. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:12, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I agree with Ivy. If anything, I'd say make all the stripes look like the ones on his face. 01:11 Tue Nov 22

Reuploaded. I didn't have time this evening to make him a spotted tabby, so I stuck with wavy. =P 03:24, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

24 Hours - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Patchpelt (W) - Tweaked
Shading Tweeak. Might have gotton rid of some blurred lineart too, OA= Echoheart - 23:14, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:25, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck. 23:41, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's all blurred to the max. If you guys still think it needs fixing then perhaps someone can help me out with it - 01:11, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Just smudge up and down on the neck. This should fix the shading. 22:49, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 21:11, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

24 Hours - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Swoop (CG) - Redone
OA was Iceheart. Had to be redone to match her queen charart. Took all colors from her queen charart. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:55, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the mud a bit. What I did on the queen image was make the opacity a bit less than 100. Also smudge it too. Looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:37, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:45, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I still think the mud needs to be a bit lighter/redder to match her queen image, and could you blur the stripes just a tad. 18:09, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:15, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

24 Hours - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Speckle (Lo) ~ Redone
Wow, it's seems like ages since I last posted a charart... OA was Icethroat and it needed to match her description and queen image. 18:31, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add more flecks on the legs and chest. 18:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the shading & blur it - 19:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:20, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, you sure matched mine well. :o Anyways, this is great! Blur the midsection shading a bit and shrink a few of the bigger specks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:19, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink. 20:27, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:38, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back a bit more and define the ear-pink a tad. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:16, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:53, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)