Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Flametail ~ Silver Nomination
I am nominating Falmetail becasue he looks good enough to be silver! Comments?

~Brackenfur66~ 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66~Brackenfur66~ 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mean Flametail? His second quote doesn't show his personality; you might want to find a better one. also, expand Night whispers, and Fading echoes. 22:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Outcast, Sunrise, The Fourth Apprentice, and Sign of the Moon. I'm sure there's better quotes somewhere else. 23:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

No promblem. Just give me a week.

P.S. my siggie isn't ready yet sorry

~Brackenfur66~

Are you still working on this? 23:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yep still workin.

☺Brackenfur66☺ 02:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66☺Brackenfur66☺ 02:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to take over this one as Brackenfur says he is leaving the wiki and this hasn't been touched since the 12th. Any objections? 12:52, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

None for me..... 12:54, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, go ahead. Expand Outcast, Sunrise, The Fourth Apprentice, and Sign of the Moon. Also add better quotes from somewhere else. 21:51, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

I am actually staying but if Atelda is gonna take over thats just fine I'll try another cat. Sorry guys!

Bracken fur  66!

Are you still working on this, Atelda? 22:36, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

They're all expanded. I'll add better quotes a little later tonight. 23:41, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, it's not that night, but it might be a few days as I need to get a few books from the library. Sorry! :) 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rock (Healer) ~ Silver Nominaion
I see nothing wrong with him. He looks ready. Any suggestions? 00:01, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you expand Outcast some more? Other than, it looks great! ^^ 19:52, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

All expanded :) 21:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also expand or add more detail too Long Shadows. It seems very choppy and concise. 00:47, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

All set. Sorry about the late reply my cpu crashed and I am currently at the library. Anything for the Wiki :) 17:40, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find another quote? If not, supporting. 00:02, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

All set :) 20:05, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Am I done? 20:48, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Be patient. ;D I checked it over, fixed a few punctuation mistakes, and it looks ready. I'll add it to the CBV list. 22:10, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't shoot me, but is it possible for you to extend the Secrets of the Clans and Cats of the Clans section? I mean, he is the narrator of the latter, so there should be a little more to elaborate on. =) 15:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if we would really add everything he said in CotC, since he did narrate the whole story, but SotC might be able to be expanded. 23:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I can't find him in SoTC. Do you guys have a Page number? F i r e s t a r !  23:21, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, ask Cloudy, or search up Rock in HarperCollins. 23:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Page 98. It's called An Ancient Cat Speaks, and Rock gives some really good information about the ancient cats. You could add some, or I can do it for you, if you don't have the book. =) 23:26, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Cloudy, why don't you just go ahead and add it in, so that this can be CBVed. 22:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add it in, but it should still count as Firestar's vote, since I already have three and she did most of the work. 16:49, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, done. 16:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteberry - Silver Nomination
A very minor character. Well, comments? 19:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whos's Whiteberry? xD jk. This looks great! 21:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add as the quote where he is sharing tongues at the gathering? And if any more sentences mention him, use them as his quotes. 02:15, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, but I remember in CP, Oakheart, I think, said that the elders (including him) were chatting away. In Chapter 20, I think, he is mentioned. Add that. 00:34, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try to find it. 19:22, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Erm.. I don't have CP.. Sorry xD 21:15, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you use harpercollins or something? I don't have it right now either. 22:44, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done! :D 23:49, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Any comments? xD Sorry, I'm impatient. 20:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Do we need to put "it is assumed he died"? No offense, that sounds a little unprofessional. Although I can't think of anything better to put.... (x.x;;) 00:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he doesn't appear in any other books after that… ~Snowdazzle (not signed in :l)

Its okay to say that its assumed that he died, we did that on a lot of other articles. But, could you add the history and quote that Oakheart says that the elders would chat the night away if they could or something? It doesn't actually mention him, but he is talking about the group of elders that Whiteberry is in. 22:05, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the'' 'onlys In the text. Such as he is only seen when ......  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  06:15, September 22, 2011 (UTC)''

Are you still working on this? 22:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I did what Owl said, but I need CP. 11:52, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

All done! 22:07, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower - Silver Nomination
Aahhhh... the thrill of nominating again. :) I went through her article, and expanded history where I could, and found some good quotes. I will still look for some more, but for the time, being it looks fine. 23:12, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! If you can find more quotes, great, but if not, then thats good. Can the last sentence of Dawn be expanded? Does Morningflower say anything to show that she is satisfied? Sorry, but I don't have the book, so I can't check. 22:11, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Its been over a week. Are you still working on this? 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Three weeks now. Anyone want to take over? 00:54, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Meep, I shall since I feel like I've been kind of lazy in PC. :P 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, a quote has been added and Dawn has been expanded. 21:32, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Violet ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? Swee tflo  wer  I'm sweeter than you think! 01:49, September 17, 2011 (UTC) Can you expand Heart of a Warrior by mentioning what she did in the dream as well as go more in depth with Cats of the Clans? It's a bit brief. Also could you provide more to the last quote? It can be a bit confusing. :) 01:59, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't own wither of those books xD To the library! Would you wind helping if you own one of the two? Swee tflo  wer  I'm sweeter than you think! 17:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, sure. I'll do Cats of the Clans since I neither own nor read the mangas. 23:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I dont have Heart of a Warrior and I don't think I'm going to the library anytime soon. Swee tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think! 12:02, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, Cats of the Clans section is done btw. 12:45, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Atelda! I'll see if I can get to the manga, but if anyone offers to help, I can't say no :3  Swee  tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think! 17:16, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Any chance you could flesh out Cats of the Clans? It looks kinda choppy. Nice job! SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 02:19, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll try ;)  Swee  tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think!   23:11, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Done  Swee  tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think! 23:18, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Would you mind editing the first paragraph of the "Secrets of the Clans" section? I think the wording could be...simplified? But it looks really nice so far. :) Holly  dapple798  21:28, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'm on it! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 21:36, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done  S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 21:41, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Er, well CBV?

Vote is up! 21:28, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowstar - Silver Nomination
Comments? 22:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add a transition to where it says that s/he supports Darkstar's new addition to the warrior code? Since I don't have the book, does it explain or hint why her/his eye's look troubled. If not, don't worry about it. :) 23:38, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add a quote? It does say that s/he says that there was a fox or something... 01:17, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Done. She didn't say anything but I added a narrator quote, if that's okay. 00:02, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. Any more quotes you could add? SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 02:18, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks really good. The part where Yellowstar is mentioning the fox on ShadowClan territory and how they were having trouble with it didn't read very smoothly, though. The article looks pretty good otherwise. :) Holly  dapple798  00:03, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

No more quotes. How do yous uggest I fix it, Hollydapple? 16:51, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ottersplash ~ Silver Nomination
I understand she wasn't on the concerns list, but she needed work. Comments? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 23:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good job! Add a few more quotes - I'm going to add one, since I have CP on me right now. Crookedstar's Promise should be expanded, and maybe flesh out Battles of the Clans? Also, is there any trivia? 23:34, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'll have to look. I don't own CP or Battles of the Clans, I'll have to rent it, but I think I'm buying CP soon. As for trivia and all, I'll try to find some... Shadewing  Blades of the Night 23:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing 

Also, add in some of the links ;3 23:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fleshed out Battle of the Clans. I will get to CP, quotes, and links soon. x3 Shadewing  Blades of the Night  00:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Quotes have been added, onto links. I won't be able to do CP until I get the book, which I think I'm getting it next week. Unless I can rent it. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:40, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can the beginning of both Bluestar's Prophecy, and Crookedstar's Promise both flow better? The ending of Crookedstar's Promise was ended a bit abrubtly. Nice work. 01:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you can add the descriptions to the quotes? It just says who said it, and that isn't enough to tell us about her personality. 01:20, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

I will do both of those things asap. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 01:33, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Fixed up Bluestar's Prophecy. I ordered CP, and I should have it soon. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:28, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Great, just fix CP, and this can be CBVed once more votes end. You can also use HarperCollins for minor things.. 22:32, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for doing this. I was working on this orginally, but I just couldn't get CP. I have a great quote, but I don't know what page it's on... ><  YatzSliversword     Defender of Sacred Grove  22:48, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. Keep it up!

No problem, Yatz. I'l try HarperCollins, Mistystar, but I'm not sure I'll find much... Shadewing  Blades of the Night 01:08, September 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Okay, I should have CP in two days at the most. Sorry guys. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 21:19, September 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alrighty, I have CP. I'm almost done getting all the information on her. I'll start expanding tomorrow. Sorry for all the delay everyone. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 01:54, September 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Is this still being worked on? S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 18:33, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Magpie ~ Silver Nomination
Considering I've done both his chararts, I've taken quite a liking to him. He's quite a minor character, so I don't think there's much more that can be added. I'm looking for quotes now. 16:53, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I've expanded the article about as much as I can, fixed the references for the family and added four quotes - one main and three others. 19:00, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good, Skye! Hm, is there any trivia? And maybe add a few links. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:42, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I added links for all character that were mentioned, and everything that I could. There isn't any trivia, either. 00:48, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. It looks wonderful. =) Shadewing  Blades of the Night  00:58, September 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Why thank you. This is the first character article I've worked on in quite a long time. Well, aside from some minor details, but that's about it. 00:59, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to lead into the article a bit better? Also, could you incoperate the moonstone/foodstone more? No worries if you can't. 01:05, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The Moonstone/Foodstone thing is about a paragraph long, so I didn't have much to work with. I tried to redo that first sentence, and what's up now is what I could come up with. 01:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll add it to the CBV list. 21:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 21:28, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) ~ Silver Nomination
Her article looks awesome. I also added in a main quote, and a another quote for the bottom. I am doing her loner charart too, which makes it even better. xD Anyways, comments? 02:48, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add 2 more quotes to the quote section? 01:05, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I added one more right now, but I'll add another when I'm back on Friday. 14:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Done. ''' 16:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Unbold Mitzi's name in the main quote, it looks kinda weird that way, Sorry if i sound picky. 18:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Done. 'You aren't picky, it did ''look weird. 20:19, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Please change the quote thing on the bottom where it says "Mitzi wants her kits to be watched" To "Mitzi wanting her kits to be watched 01:05, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

'''Done. ''' 03:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change the description for the quote that says that Piper wants to play moss-ball? The current description doesn't really describe Mitzi; it just talks about Piper. 23:27, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

'''Done. ''' 00:26, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 21:28, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nightmask - Silver Nomination
I chose an easy one because I just joined. Anyways, there wasn't much to add, I just added a sentence. And I think he is ready (wow, nominating an article THIS early). Comments? 01:37, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add a quote section and/or a main quote if possible. 01:43, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, done. I hope that quote works. 01:55, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more quotes? Also add descrpitions to the quotes. 20:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he only ever had two quotes in the entire series, and that other one (besides the one already on his page) doesn't really show his personality. I'm not sure what you mean by "descriptions" to the quotes. 21:18, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then never mind about finding more quotes, and for the descriptions, I meant, for the quote section quote, you might say something like "Nightmask questioning the ThunderClan visitors", or something to tell what the quote is about. 21:21, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Done. 21:30, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful job. I'll add it to the CBV list. 21:33, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 21:28, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oatwhisker ~ Silver Nomination
His page looks complete. Comments? 11:55, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

If you're talking about the ThunderClan Oatwhisker, wonderful job. I see nothing wrong. 17:24, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? Yes, this is the ThunderClan one, since the WindClan one is already silver. 21:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the flow of the article is a bit choppy. And I think that the last quote would fit better as the main quote, but it's nominators choice. 21:53, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are there anymore links that can be added? Also, I agree with Atelda about the quote. However, it's your choice. 02:04, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Its been a week. Are you still working on this? 23:18, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...Sorry, I forgot to post. xD So, I switched the quote, but didn't really know how to make the article flow better. 10:25, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, I'd just add in some transitions here and ther and reword a few phrases. Otherwise it looks great! 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Done :3 21:28, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Atelda! :3 05:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Petalkit (LC) ~ Silver Nomination
Another minor character. I figure I'll do smaller ones until I get back into the gist of things. So, comments? 22:53, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes you could add? 00:34, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

None at all. The main quote and the other one are actually the same thing. I just broke it up so it would look better. 00:42, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly add a narrator quote, then? 01:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Done. There aren't any other quotes I can add to the article, not even narrator ones. 01:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great. I'll add it to the CBV list. 23:31, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 21:32, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Splash When Fish Leaps ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sign of the Moon seems like it's just listing out the appearences/mentions Splash had in the book. Connect many of the short sentences together as they're quite abridged. As well as adding transitions and paragraph breaks where needed. 15:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Atelda. Also, find another quote if possible. The main quote shouldn't be repeated in the "Quotes" section. Redundancy doesn't look good. =P 15:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Just to let you know the main quote wasn't repeated in the Quotes section when I checked and I did add in another quote before. I'm not trying to sound stubborn or anything, it's just that I did and when I checked it wasn't there. Anyway I tried to smooth the Sign of the Moon section and added another 3 quotes. Although I'm not sure if the two last quotes should both be in there, or only one of them, or neither, or if they should be connected, because they're both on the same page. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  01:20, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It looks pretty good. One thing that caught my eye is that the first paragraph of the SoTM didn't read smoothly. Try merging some of the first few sentences, like where Splash is mentioned going out on patrol and when she helps Dovewing out of the snow. Other than that, I think it looks pretty good! Holly dapple798  01:57, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Done <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:26, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

You should only have three quotes. I think you should keep the first, second and last. However, it's up to you, since you're the one nominating her. 06:37, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think I agree with you Cloudy, and I did delete the third and fourth quote. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  01:17, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Adding to CBV list... 02:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur ~ Silver Nomination
I have been working on him a little bit and I think its good! 04:02, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Flesh out Firestar's Quest a little bit. 00:12, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

There's some trivia that needs to be cited. Could The Darkest Hour, The Sight, Outcast, Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon be fleshed out/expanded? 00:14, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 03:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Tinycloud ~ Silver Nomination
Aside from a few minor things, I think she looks good. Comments? 00:13, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Flesh out The Rescue. Is it possible that Firestar's Quest could be expanded? 00:31, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I can't flesh out what she doesn't appear in, Icey. She's only mentioned on like, a page. 00:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Seems pretty good, to me. ;) Though Tinycloud was mentioned again in The Rescue on page 45 by Sandypaw I think... Mi  st  y!  21:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. She was. I didn't catch it at first. I fixed it now. 22:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add a description for the second quote in the quote section? 22:20, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 22:25, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! I'll add it to the CBV list. 23:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fleck - Silver Nomination
Ok, I had written most of his history a few weeks ago, and I just added a few quotes to his page. This would be my first real nomination since Milkfur was so minor, so, any suggestions? 02:48, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you elaborate more on when Crookedkit leaves? Nice work. 02:53, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Alright done. I just hope I didn't stray too far away from Fleck himself, and I can always reword it if need be. Thanks =) 02:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Brilliant! I don't mean to hammer you with critiques, but I just noticed that the last quote is not in a dialogue template. Otherwise it's amazing ;) 03:04, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well it is but I wasn't exactly sure how to code it. Do I just need to make it in bold? I'm sorry, I should know how to do this ^^; 03:07, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're fine ;). All you need to do is add a different template which if you search, "Dialogue a-b" it should give you the correct formatting. List the speaker, then their quote and continue. Then when done, scroll all the way to the bottem and put in your reference, and description. 03:19, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! Done =) 03:32, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you add more to the description of the second quote in the quote section? It doesn't really show his personality unless you tell more about it. 23:13, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done, how's that? 21:31, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand the history more? 02:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, there were only a few more things I could add. Anything else? 03:43, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Could you add more history on when Crookedjaw remembers Fleck (i.e When he hunts mice and he remembers how Fleck taught him how do it) <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 00:29, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Foxwhisker ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 02:54, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The two paragraphs in below the intro have some style issues. Otherwise good job. 02:58, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Break up the last paragraph if possible. Other then what Atelda suggested, it looks good. 06:35, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed 02:57, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add more things about Foxwhisker in the last paragraph? Looks good <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 00:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC) It looks really, really good so far, but could you change it where they said that they "slipped into the water" at the end of the third paragraph? It sounds like they, well, slipped into the gorge. Holly dapple798  21:32, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done! 08:45, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Firekit ~ Silver Nomination
The article looked ready, so I fixed the history a bit, and I don't think she says anything that I can use as a quote, and I don't think Leafstar naming her after Firestar has anything to do with her personality, so I'm not adding that. Comments? 23:11, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't we wait until the other books come out before nominating Firekit and her siblings? I think for now though, the quote about Firekit being named after Firestar would work, because at least it's something to work with. 23:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, we can nominate things before all the books come out; many Tribe characters were nominated only a few weeks before SotM came out. I don't have the book for the rescue, so the only thing I actually did for the article was grammar/spelling/punctuation fixing. Can you add the quote, if you have the book? 00:10, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, okay. And yes, I'll add the quote. I have the book right in front of me, actually. 00:11, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Lucky you. :3 I reserved it from the library a long time before it came out, and I still don't have it. 00:13, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

As I said in the summary, it makes a lot more sense to have it as a regular quote, because if you didn't, it would look really odd. I hope that works for you. 00:24, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! It looks great! =D 00:26, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

CBV list. 21:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Snipe ~ Silver Nomination
He is a very minor character, since, of course, he was only mentioned/seen in one or two books. So I thought it would be okay for a Silver Nomination. ^-^ Thoughts? M i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   00:01, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Expand A Clan In Need if possible, other than that, it looks good. Maybe see if he is mentioned in any other books? S w  E  e  T  f  L  o  W  e  R  I'm SwEeTeR tH  aN yOu ThInK! 17:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll get on to that, but to answer your question, no he is not mentioned or seen in any other books. :)  M  i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   00:38, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Since he is a very minor character, I added just a bit more. I then kind of fixed the paragraph to make it kind of flow more. M i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   01:00, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add more of a description to the quotes. Looking good! 03:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Done. How is it? 19:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible for you to break up the first paragraph in the History? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 00:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Done, is that what you mean? Sorry if its not. xD 19:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice so far, but to me, it seems like "he/his/him" is used too much, so maybe change it to "Snipe" at least once or twice in each paragraph? Holly dapple798  21:42, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good, and that was a good comment Hollydapple! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 23:12, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Changed it a bit, but I didn't want to overuse Snipe either. How does it look? :3 00:06, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you take out the: "he is mentioned when" 's?  S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 02:45, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, fixed that. :^-^ 14:48, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Good, that looks better :)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 18:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Could you change it where it says, "Snipe is used to be one of Scourge's closest guards" please? Sorry, I just noticed that. :3 <font color="orange" style="background:Black">Hollydapple798 Life's no fun without a good scare... 21:07, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed! Thanks for pointing that out, Hollydapple! ^-^  M  i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   21:17, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rain That Passes Quickly ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 22:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you possibly find a main quote instead of the narrator (bad spelling xD) talking, to something she says? If not looks good. S w  E  e  T  f  L  o  W  e  R  I'm SwEeTeR tH  aN yOu ThInK! 23:34, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but thats the only non-dialogue quote that relates to her, and it shows her personality, so its fine. 22:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's fine, just thought I'd check :D  S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 23:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I would like to mention that as long as the quote shows the characters personality, it doesn't matter who the quote was coming from. Adding to CBV list.

Dewstar ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? S w  E  e  T  f  L  o  W  e  R  I'm SwEeTeR tH  aN yOu ThInK! 23:29, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add any quotes? Like when he was mentioned by the other cats? 23:57, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you elaborate on the Code of the Clans section? If not, I understand. 00:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Um sure Misty if I find what chapter he's in xD And Cloudy, sorry I really don't think I can xD he's just mentioned that he dies in a battle. I think *Goes to check book*  S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 00:23, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine if you can't. I don't mind. =) 03:49, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I did, like by 5 or 6 words, but that's literally all I could expand the article xD  S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 23:20, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make The History flow better? Sorry if it's just me but it seems to choppy <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 00:42, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Done. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 21:20, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Adding to CBV list. 21:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart ~ Silver Nomination
I've been working on her and I think she's ready. Comments? 03:32, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Fire and Ice, Forest of Secrets, Moonrise, Sunset, and Secrets of the Clans? It's okay if you can't for some of them. :) 03:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)S

Swap her name changing ceremony and warrior ceremony around. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 00:45, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

How come I should switch it around? And I'll have this done in a day or two. 13:59, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Keep the ceremonies how they are, Ivy. Those are in the order in which they happened. Can you extend Dark River, if possible? 22:14, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I thought the name of the ceremony had to have the name of the cats name before they got their new name, thats probally why I got confused. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 04:35, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

She was named Lostface by Bluestar. Then, later one, Firestar renamed her Brightheart. The order it's in now is just fine. =) 04:40, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. And I think I'm almost done, guys. 14:11, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand Sign of the Moon? 16:43, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Would like to Join
Hello! My name's IsabellaLover, but I would like to be called Brightpelt on here. ;) Anyways, even though I'm new, I'm a big fan of the Warriors series, and would like to help out in this. :) Let me know if I can! Thanks! :) Isabella  Lover  16:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! See the FAQ for any questions. Welcome to PC! 22:36, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome Brightpelt! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 23:17, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lilyfur ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 00:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add another quote? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 00:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Done, and I added descriptions for the second and third quote. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 21:14, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Jake ~ Silver Nomination
Comments <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  01:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but you'll need to find more quotes. The last quote in the quote section is the same as the main quote, and the second-to-last quote doesn't show his personality. Also add a description to his first quote in the quote section. 22:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thats okay, but when I searched Bluestar's Prophecy harpercollins I could only see sentences when Bluefur was rememering Pinestar joining the kittypets and wondering if he was seeing Jake, and I'm not sure if those show his personality. I added a description for the first quote. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 06:37, October 7, 2011 (UTC) Would you mind adding spaces between the paragraphs in the Bluestar's Prophecy section? Thanks. <font color="orange" style="background:Black">Hollydapple798 Life's no fun without a good scare... 21:02, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Loner/Rogue
There is still a lot of controversy on whether a cat is a loner or rogue, so I'm having a hard time classifying. Here are a list of cats I think should have the loner tag: Barley, Berrynose, Birdy, Boulder, Brook, Chirp, Cloudy, Coal, Crowfeather, Daisy, Domino, Egg, Fleck, FLoss, FLower (Lo), Frisk, Fritz (PO3), Frosty, Graystripe, Hazeltail, Hawkfrost, Husker, Hussar, Ice, Icicle, Jagged Rock where Heron Sits, Jester, Jet, Jingo, Leafpool, Lichenfur, Little Mew, Magpie, Mapleshade, Merry, Millie, Minty, Mist (Lo), Mitzi (Lo), Moss (Lo), Mothflight, Mothwing, Mousewhisker, Pad, Pepper, Piper, Pod, Pricklenose, Purdy, Raindrop, Rainfur, Ravenpaw, River (Leader), Rock Beneath Still Water, Ruby, Sasha, Shadow (Leader), Skywatcher, Sky (Leader), Snake (BC), Smoky, Socks, Snowflake, Sniff, Sol, Soot, Speckle, Splash (Lo), Stormfur, Tadpole, Talon of Swooping Eagle, Thunder, Twig, Wind, Woody

I know that's a lot, but do all of them really deserve to be called loners or are some just rogues? Thanks for any help you might be able to offer, 21:04, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I've always thought loners are those who do not bother with the Clans and live peacefully while rogues are those who we're either exiled from the Clans/Tribe and later (possibly) seen extremely aggressive. Also, with the some of those characters you've listed, some of them we're only kits when loners/rogues so I think that when categorizing someone as a rogue/loner, the should be full grown, or at least not a kit. That's what I presume though. 21:17, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Even if they were a kit, they were still born to a loner and therefore a loner, so I still listed them. And on their character pages, it says that in the past, they were a loner. I'm not sure either. 21:23, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Loners are cats who pose no threat to others, like Ravenpaw or Barley. Rogues are cats who cause some sort of problem, like Willie. I think any cat who gets classified as a loner or rogue should be at least six moons or older. 22:10, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, then. But what about Talon of Swooping Eagle and the others? They were exiled, but posed no threat to the Tribe. However, they are classified as rogues. 03:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's probably because they were exiled. I mean, it makes sense. Stoneteller probably thought they would pose a threat to the Tribe, so he called them rogues. 04:01, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, he called them rogues, but were they really rogues? 01:36, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

No, probably not, but Stoneteller called them that. They should also be mentioned as loners, since it seems that they caused no harm to any cat. 01:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Should they belong in the Category: Loners? 00:17, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

User: Dazzlewing~Join Request
May I join the project? I'm pretty desperate...  Dazzle  wing  Whazzup! 22:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'll add you in momentarily. Please take a look at the FAQ and welcome to the project. 23:00, October 8, 2011 (UTC)