Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Folder for images that had been up for approval before the beginning of Tweak Week.

Bluestar (W) - Redone
So, I re-did the image, and I am sorry, but I do not know who made the image before. I wasn't sure if I should add the scar, so please tell me if I should. εСћб ђэάѓτ  11:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

i think should not cause was it seen on her leader or older warrior image? otherwise this is really good apart from the shading under the neck that i think is supposed to be there but i dont know  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 12:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading, ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I darkened the shading and blurred the highlights. εСћб ђэάѓτ  16:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but perhaps make the ear pink a bit bigger? insane brick'd 16:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto insane. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made ear pink bigger. How's it now? εСћб ђэάѓτ  17:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading needs serious blurring. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   18:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Is it okay? εСћб ђэάѓτ  18:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. The blue is a little dark--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit, she looks very dark compared to her other images Night  Fall 18:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

She's supposed to have a silver tinged muzzle and tail tip.XxdovesongXX 07:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

She only had the silver muzzle and tipped tail because she was getting old. I don't think it's needed on her warrior image, because she is still young--  Night s h i n e    ~  07:21, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made her lighter. εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading the back leg. ♥Ice shine★  15:59, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It could still be lightened more. I think the colour should be similar to her kit and apprentice images--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:30, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit too bright, try desaturating it some Night  Fall 17:10, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad, and make the muzzle silver. Dawny  19:40, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add the silver tipped tail? Mõŏń    ۞   03:59, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was after she got old Night  Fall 06:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

blur haunch shading. ♥Ice shine★  14:52, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink just doesn't seem right for this colour pelt. Perhaps take it from another blue-ish cat with a more natural colour. Maybe Mistystar? -- Sandy star 19:56, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I changed the earpink to look more like Mistystar's, I blurred as much as I could, and I desaturated it. I didn't add the silver tipped muzzle and tail because that was when she got older. εСћб ђэάѓτ  12:32, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

She's should be more of a gray color. Darkhallows... Mew? 18:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree with Shady; she needs to match the colour of her other images. Using the desaturate tool should do the trick and then redo the ear pink and eye colour. -- Sandy star 08:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Darken the shading ♥Ice  storm★  12:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree with Darhollows. Rubyblaze 19:01, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree as well, she looks very, very blue. It doesn't match her other images, really.XxdovesongXX 21:38, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (W) - Tweaked
Okay, so I got rid of the mottled parts, (if you didn't notice, some mottled spots were there) re-did the shading, added highlights, and re-did the ear pink. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do that...but, comments? ♥Ice shine★  14:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I dont see anything that needs fixing or the mistakes are hardly seen to me so good job  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 14:32, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink could be a bit longer. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 17:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Goldenpaw on the ear pink. Also, blur the highlights a bit more. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:30, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Made ear pink longer. I can't blur the highlights. ♥Ice shine★  17:37, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are a bit too concentrated, and the highlight on the shoulder should be a tad bit taller. Blur the ear pink some more.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 17:56, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Iceshine★ 19:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the haunch just a little bit; it's still too concentrated.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:37, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:  ♥Ice shine★  19:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and blur it--  Night s h i n e    ~  00:25, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Ice  shine★  03:26, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more--  Night s h i n    e    ~  04:48, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It can't blur it. ♥Ice shine★  13:38, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit, otherwise this is really good!  Dawny  01:04, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I lightened the ear pink and blurred it, as I forgot to upload it when Night mentioned it. ♥Ice shine★  14:29, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Errm, the shading still looks a bit bright. It's very nice though.XxdovesongXX 19:48, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is bright? ♥Ice shine★  21:40, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Dovesong meant the highlights. I don't think they're too bright though. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  18:37, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

They still need blurring. They are too circular. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   22:46, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Ice  shine★  14:56, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The haunch and face highlight look fine but the one in the middle still looks off. Maybe make it a bit longer. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  15:04, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Ice  storm★  19:21, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The shoulder highlights still needs blurring. Move the ear pink up a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:36, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred as much as possible-- ♥Ice storm★  19:54, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still needs to be moved up some more. The shoulder highlight looks odd for some reason. Try brightening it a bit and blurring the shading around it-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:59, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the shoulder more Tawny SMEASH 22:25, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

It can't blur TotallyTawnypelt. Night, I'll get right to work. ♥Ice storm★  22:27, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar (R) - Redone
I think it's not my best. . . but Ok. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   23:02, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks really cool! Add some more stripes, and darken the cream patches Night  Fall 23:10, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Blur the stripes too, and some lineart on the head is missing. ♥Ice shine★  23:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should compare it to the other images. her cream and brown are much darker, and the patches are more blurred. Good job, though :)XxdovesongXX 07:23, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the lighter cream patches, they are a bit too bright. Dawny  00:53, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Also, darken chest shading. ♥Ice shine★  22:07, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I didn't change the colors because I got them from her leader image. And the stripes are the way they are because I tried to make them like the warrior image. And I based the stripes off of that image, so I didn't add them. And I can't do much about the blurring. Pixlr sucks. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   00:50, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really know what to tell you than. The cream is too noticable, so darkening it might not be a bad idea. That small bit of line art on the forehead is still missing too. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  01:45, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too messy, blur them more, smudge them, or redo them. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:10, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine, it's just that you really need to darken the cream and I think it would help if you smudged it around the egdes with a fairly large brush, and then blur it. It always helps me for things like these. . .XxdovesongXX 21:36, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes - Willo wwh isp   21:47, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the cream and blurred the stripes. There was no missing lineart when I checked it. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   19:46, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the cream patches some more, to match her leader image.  Dawny  22:33, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry If I sound annoying, but in my opinion they do match the leader image. I checked. I got the original color from it. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   23:20, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the cream patches look a teensy bit orange to me. Not a huge thing though. Anyone else agree? Otherwise, disregard. It may just be my computer, acting up again. ωiſd ɦɛɑrŧ  05:06, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's not that the color of the patches is wrong it's just that they're more blurred in her leader image. See Ashshadow o  r Creamsplash  23:07, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudspots (MC) -Redone
Sandstar12 did the original image. Anyways shading was to hard to fix, so I just redid him,comments?  Dawny  18:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

lol. I deeply apologise for the awful image you had to try and edit, and thank you for taking on such a task. This looks nice; just add some highlights to the herbs and blend the shading a little more. -- Sandy star 18:25, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions a bit more and darken the ear pink a tiny bit--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:41, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Run the burn tool over the whole image once or twice Night  Fall 20:37, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the tail shading. ♥Ice shine★  21:26, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred the shading, fixed the ear pink, darkended the image,highlighted the herbs, and blurred the white parts, anything else? Dawny  23:16, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading ♥Ice  shine★  14:33, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred chest shading.  Dawny  01:51, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The front paw closest to us should be darkened a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  04:09, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the front paw.  Dawny  03:05, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail, haunch and back. =) -- Sandy star 08:33, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink. - Willo wwh isp   21:49, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading; didn't lighten the ear pink because I don't think its necessary.  Dawny  04:24, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandy star 17:24, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Ki)- Redone
Original artist was me. Color change to a more ginger color. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  16:47, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good. Darken the shading. ♥Ice shine★  17:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Ice. Anything else? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:38, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure, but it may not be as pale as her new queen image. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 22:50, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thats where I got the color from. Shading takes up more room on a kit than on a queen. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:54, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe, brighten the highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:02, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

I don't highlight shorthaired kits. It just doesn't work for me. I lightened the shading though. Better? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:16, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

That's fine about the higlights: they are not necessary. I think that perhaps it does need to be lighter however - perhaps lighten the whole image a little. -- Sandy star 17:28, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:37, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 02:21, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Gah, this sucks. Comments and/or critique?--Shaf Girl  23:21, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:23, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and darken the shading-- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:25, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear fathest from us a bit.  Dawny  23:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken it, and blur it. Add shading to the head. ♥Ice shine★  00:01, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ah noes... the <3 colour is being lost by the removal of the shading. Definitely darken it and thicken it. The original shading was the right colour, just needed extending to other areas. -- Sandy star 08:38, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I completely redid it.--Shaf Girl  17:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:36, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the muzzle and tail. ♥Ice storm★  12:11, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little.  Dawny  05:55, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blackstar (L) Tweaked
Here's Shimmerpool's image tweaked a bit. I'm not very proud of this...it was really hard to darken and blur the shading because it was done with the square shaped burn tool, and I was using the round. Anyway, did my best to darken the shading. I also changed the ear pink and nose color, as they were both very purple. And I added the black ears. Note: I've seen his pictures, it's the back of his ears that are black, not the whole ear. Anyway, comments? :) Night  Fall 01:18, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred a bit of line art around the shoulder. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  01:38, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I fixed it

Smooth out the shading some more. The ear fur is a little odd looking. Make it fluffier-- n i g h t  s h i n e  02:01, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out out the shading and blur it. ♥Ice shine★  02:47, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to work :) But next time, remember that if someone has already told the artist what to do, you don't need to say it again :) Night  Fall 02:50, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I think it's better now. Night Fall 04:57, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink's shading looks odd. Also, it should be uploaded over the original picture. :) -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 05:04, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

How would I fix it? And my bad, I wasn't sure whether or not I should; sorry xD Night  Fall 05:07, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure. I think it just needs a bit more blurring. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 05:08, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better? I blurred and lightened it a bit Night  Fall 05:12, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

That's better. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 05:36, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck some more, then this should be perfect-- n i g h t  s h i n e  06:27, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Pouncetail (W)) - Tweaked
The original artist was myself. The shading needed fixing so I have done so. I had to darken the pelt colour to allow me to add more shading. -- Sandy star 12:50, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading ♥Ice  shine★  16:20, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Um, there is no back shading... which is kinda the point. The light source is coming from the top right. I could maybe mess with some highlights though. -- Sandy star 16:30, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should just darken the shading a bit. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:24, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I know that what needed fixing was the shading, but should you change the patches to look like the ones on his elder image or no? - <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:red; Background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp   21:53, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I darkened the shading. As for the patches... the simple answer is that no, I would rather not. -- Sandy star 17:35, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Flametail (A) - Tweaked
Same deal as his MCA image - it needed to be made longhaired, so I filled in all the new fur tufts (or whatever you call them) but left the original color as much as possible. How is it? insane brick'd 13:17, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit and lighten the ear pink-- n i g h t  s h i n e  17:40, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) - Tweaked
I'm not sure who the original artist was The original artist was Mallinois. I blurred and extended the shading a little and made the hind leg broken. Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 16:10, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken tail shading. ♥Ice shine★  16:19, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there is some exra lineart around the herbs. I like what you did with her hind leg. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  16:20, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thickened the tail shading and fixed the herb lineart. Also, I checked in the approved archives and the original artist was Mallinois. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 23:42, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. ♥Ice storm★  12:07, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Burred the shading. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 15:00, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. Maybe, shorten the line art on the injured leg, so it doesn't go so far into the haunch. I hope that makes sense. Add arm shading and add a white pixel in the eye, it doesn't look like there is one.-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:41, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Made the ear pink smaller, added arm shading, and put a highlight in the eye. And I'm not sure what you mean by "shortening" the leg lineart. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 15:31, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

She means that it looks like her leg is coming from the base of her tail rather than where the leg would come from which is further forward therfore the lineart would be a shorter line. -- Sandy star 17:36, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) - Redone


I have to say this was a bit challenging to do...whoever came up with Spottedleaf's wacky but beautiful appereance, I hope they have a cat like her to prove it! lol...anywayz it was kind of fun to redo and I did my best matching the patteren to her apprentice image and used the colors from it as well. What do you guys think?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:09, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions more, lighten the ear pink, darken the shading.-- n i g h t  s h i n e  17:41, July 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:04, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the white on the muzzle-- ♥Ice storm★  12:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderheart (W) - Shading


The shading needed some help; added some highlights, perfected shading, changed eye, and blurred ear pink a bit. Original artist was myself. Further suggestions? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 23:19, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be darkened. But right above the tail the shading is darker/less blurred than the rest. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:44, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. But I do think the tail shading could be darkened a tad. ♥Ice storm★  12:05, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I went with the consensus and didn't change the overall shading. Darkened and blurred the tail shading slightly. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 14:26, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink.-- n i g h t  s h i n e  06:26, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

If I define it more, it will look sharp. The ear pink is fine; as a matter of fact it matches Whitethroat's almost identically. Are there further comments aside the ear pink? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 17:11, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit more. Roa drun ner  "Meep, Meep!"  12:41, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Q) - Redone
Bleh. I doooooon't like this image. Good news: My tap number in a national comettion got third overall in the Pre-Teen Group :) Influx Lennon -   Ringo's Wife  23:22, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading a bit. Make it a bit more sandy coloured, it looks a bit pink right now-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  02:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more stripes-- ♥Ice storm★  12:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I I add anymore stripes, it won't look like Sandstorm anymore. I (think) I added the amount she has on her warrior image. Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  13:17, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more reddish.  Dawny  21:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

She's too dark. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Maybe lighten her a bit? -- Sky Dawn Light... 23:16, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

define the ear pink more. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;backround:lime;border:1px solid -moz-border-radius: 1em; color:purple;">MOSSLEAP:)

Define the stripes on her tail and forearms more.  Dawny  05:58, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

may I join
Hi my name is willowwhisp and I was woundering if I could join. I can do some things, I know how to shade and highlight sand stuff like that. Do I need to prove anything? Am I good enough to join? -Willowwhisp 23:45, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, you can join:) Just make sure to check the guidelines before you begin and there are some tutorials to help with making chararts. Have fun:) -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 23:56, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Do I start as an apprentice?

Sorry, I forgot to sign -Willowwhisp 00:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, you start as an apprentice. We're in the middle of a Tweak Week right now, and apprentices can't post up art, but you can still comment on images.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 00:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Question
I've been having vactions and such leaving me no time to get on. Was I kicked off? And if I was can I rejoin? Rubyblaze 00:45, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, you haven't been kicked off-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:42, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstripe - Declined
Here's Darkstripe. I made the gray lighter than the original image and did different tabby stripes. I can't do eyes, so I'd appreciate it if somebody did them for me. It's my first charart, so I hope you like it! Mistfire 17:43, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

1. are you an apprentice because apprentices are not allowed to do chararts in tweak week  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 18:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is wonderful, but first, you are new to PCA, and new members aren't allowed to do Chararts during this period. And, for the image, he wasn't nominated for tweaks, since there's nothing wrong with him. ♥Ice storm★  18:47, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry Mistfire, but you are new to PCA as Icestorm stated above. Second, during tweak week, only warriors, senior warriors, the deputy, and the leader can post images up for approval. Tweak week won't last too long though ;) Second, Darkstripe was never nominated for tweak week as, as Icestorm has said, there is nothing wrong with his current picture. Will archive later Night  Fall 23:08, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandy. I fixed up the shading and added some highlights. I also made the white chest smaller-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:30, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:32, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:46, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make the ear pink smaller. ♥Ice storm★  19:55, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I needs to be blurred. And the ear pink is .... to purple.21:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC) Darkhallows... Mew?

The earpink doesn't look purple to me. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  21:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blure the highlights more. - <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:red; Background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp   22:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened shading a bit, fixed highlights, and fixed ear pink a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:08, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

darken the highlights some. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:10, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need some blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   00:19, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:01, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur white transition. ♥Ice storm★  02:16, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:54, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the highlights are really bothering me. They're too bright and concentrated, and they don't look real, no offense. Make them more like Sloefur's or similar to that, if you can. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:41, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are blotchy-looking Tawny SMEASH 22:28, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I switched to my other computer to see if this would look different than on my laptop, and it did. I tried fixing up the highlights more-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:41, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool (A)- Tweaked


I just lightened her. Darkhallows... Mew? 02:00, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger and blur the stripes. ♥Ice storm★  02:15, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I will change the ear pink, but I don't think the stripes need o be blurred a all. Darkhallows... Mew? 02:39, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make her a bit more brownish like her other images. I think the stripes should be blurred as well.-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:55, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I don't want to sound like a brat, but didn't Sandy say: 'we need to remember that we are only tweaking things that have been nominated for'?- Darkhallows not logeed on.

-sigh- The truth being that Sandy is struggling with this perhaps more than anyone else. In Bramble's absence I have made a mess of a lot of things concerning this Tweak Week. Bramble made it all very clear in the guidelines, but I have little in the way of wits this week and have managed to confuse myself so thoroughly that I have no idea whether I'm coming or going.
 * It should be noted that the Against tenants may be done if an image is up for improvement on the For tenants.

Seems I was wrong on yet another point and for that I apologise; completely my fault. I think the best thig to do is to ignore anything I have said and if in doubt, check the guidelines or wait for Bramble to clarify as I believe she is back now. Again, I'm sorry for me confusing everything as it has made this all much more difficult than it needed to be. -- Sandy star 12:53, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy is not to blame; we're all confused with the new process because we've never done it before. There is bound to be some miscommunication when there is something new being implemented. I'm not going to expect all of you to have these guidelines down perfectly, a) because I wrote them and b) some are hard to understand. I wish I had been here to help out during the beginning, as I was the one who came up with the guidelines, and I apologize for being gone. I'm here now, and I can answer any of the tricky questions you might have concerning Tweak Week. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 13:48, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looking at Leafpool's medicine cat image, this one needs to be slightly less golden and more brown overall, and her ear pink needs to be darkened. The herbs are also different colors, but that shouldn't matter. :) --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 17:27, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

May I enter as an apprentice?
I am Fiercestar_RiverClan and these Chararts are interesting I would like to join.

Fiercestar RiverClan 20:22, July 13, 2010 (UTC)Fiercestar_RiverClan

Of course! We're in the middle of tweak week right now, (tweaking images that need improvements) and apprentices aren't allowed to put up chararts at the moment. However, you can still comment on images, and tweak week won't last forever :) And if you need any help, just ask! Night  Fall 23:32, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

May I Join as an Apprentice?
Hi, I just took interest in creating charart... can I join as an Apprentice? 4pinkbear 14:37, July 14, 2010 (UTC)I'

I've added you as an apprentice. Welcome to the project! We're currently doing a tweak week at the moment, so you won't be able to put up any art yet. But, you can always comment. Hope you have fun!-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:24, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (E) - Redone
I re-did the shading and color to make it look more pale. I used the color of the queen image that was redone. Comments? Mõŏń    ۞   21:09, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Darken the ear pink a bit and define it-- n i g h t  s h i n e  21:50, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Honeyfern (W) - Tweaked
The original artist was Darkhallows. I tried to make it more of a light brown color, but I didn't actually redo the image, only edited it. I think I failed, but comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 01:17, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I think the ear pink could be darkened a bit though-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:22, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I thought it was blurred a tad bit too much, so I tried to define it some, too. Thanks, Night. How's this look?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 01:42, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur the tabby stripes on the head and tail.  Dawny  05:56, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Whitestorm (W) - Tweaked
Original user was Dawnfeather. He just needed a scar behind his ear. I also went ahead and blurred his ear pink more. Suggestions? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 01:33, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

It says on his article he has a torn ear, not a scar. -- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:56, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

"She noticed with a pang the scar behind his ear." -Bluestar's Prophecy, page 404. Someone must have edited his article, because it also says he has orange eyes on it. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 02:13, July 15, 2010 (UTC)