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Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feet shading still needs to be darkened. 00:26 Tue Nov 15

Oh, and she needs a torn ear as well. 00:34 Tue Nov 15

One thing, with highlights I just really can't use them without having bad shading. I will try to blur the shading, but I hope everyone can understand that highlights are bad for the chararts I make. 03:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I guess it's better now...

Make the ear nick a little thicker. 05:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The paws still need to be darkened. Just to clarify, right now they're lighter than the rest of the legs and that makes pretty much no sense with the current light source (or what appears to be the current light source). They need to match the colour at the top of the legs if not be darker than that. 04:50 Wed Nov 16

Reuploaded. 01:31, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. 08:05, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is a bad charart.. I darkened the shading. 05:21, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit. -- 12:16, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart on the tear please. 22:21, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:22 Sun Nov 20

Brighten the highlights more. They still don't match the other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:08, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I just found out that I can only have 2 images up, I have 3. 00:47, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'd like to take this over. :) I'll go reserve it now and reupload it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tweaked from the original image, not Stone's, but it's still tweaked. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:44, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, blur the tail shading/highlight (if that is a highlight o.o) at the tip just a smidge. Lovely job as always. -- 00:49, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Archeye (W) - Tweaked
I dont know if its redone or tweaked, I redoned stripes and shadings.. OA was Insaneular.. Leaf-storm,14:11,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Ups, changes arent showing Leaf-storm,14:13,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Why is the lineart in between his haunch and his tail gone? 16:08, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That's the old version. 16:21, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

i dont like when changes arent showing Leaf-storm,16:48,November 13,2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list, but could you make the ear-pink less purple. 22:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was on the list Leaf-storm,12:57,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Reupladed, late, sorry I wasn't on my computer before Leaf-storm,13:38,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and shading. 00:21 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded, 15:15,November 15,2011 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be darker, and darken the highlights/shading on the haunch or brighten the highlights/lighten the shading on the shoulder. Blur the stripes as well. 04:52 Wed Nov 16

Also dull the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:39, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste in the triangle where the haunch and the paws are separated. Also, near the front paws. 21:34, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,10:12,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more red than purple, and sharpen the edges of the stripes by smudging them. 23:59 Fri Nov 18

Changes arent showing ,7:07,November 19,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the front paws. 22:02, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 05:19 Sun Nov 20

Reuloaded, changes arent showing, whats with it??? ,12:01,November 20,2011 (UTC)

Too many files on the wiki, too many people (re)uploading. It happens, move the lighter shading of the chest, higher up so it's on his chest rather than on his belly. Love this! 16:18, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,12:52,November 22,2011 (UTC)

The front leg is starting to look pixelated (sp?) right near the lineart. There's a few pixels there that are lighter than they should be. Could you try and fix it? I couldn't begin to suggest how though.... 18:50, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

My mistake, sorry fixed now ,15:00,November 23,2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes consistent in darkness. 01:55 Thu Nov 24

Reuploaded ,14:48,November 24,2011 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was hollyberry; redone to be reddish brown. I took all colors from Oakheart, so I am not changing any colors. 00:11, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does the red part of his description mean that he needs stripes? :\ 00:13, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

He's red-brown, which is the same as reddish brown. Oakheart and Pinestar are reddish browna nd they don't need stripes, so I'm not adding stripes. 00:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 02:38, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks the taddest bit blotchy by where the haunch meets the foreleg. 03:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

You may not be changing any colors, but that ear pink needs to be blurred. Misty, this looks much better then the original version. 08:03, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading along his back. 93.97.191.4 18:27, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Derp. Forgot to log-in. 18:29, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 00:00 Mon Nov 21

Misty, you still working on this? 18:47, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (W) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be redone, and I accidently erased the earpink so I had to do that along with the shading.. Sorry. Dx OA was Icecloud33. Oh, and according to the new rule do I have to do her kit image along with this one? M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:20, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the shoulder highlight more circular. 21:12, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And lighten the earpink a tad. 21:18, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And no, you don't have to do her kit if you just tweaked the shading on this one. It's only if it's a major change. You're more than welcome to reserve it, though. 03:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, thanks for telling me. ^-^ Hopefully I blurred the shading enough, and I brightened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   03:26, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit more and thicken it on the shoulder a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:51, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is working, I'm new to GIMP... M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:13, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot about the waste.. >.< M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:17, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could use a bit more blurring (gaussian blur) and center the earpink a bit. :3 16:15, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink too. 23:58 Sun Nov 20

Reuploaded Decided to re-do the shading, didn't really like it here :P This time the earpink stayed xD M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   21:36, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. It looks solid. 21:50 Mon Nov 21

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:10, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:12 Mon Nov 21

Is it okay if I withdraw this? I'm just not really interested anymore.. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   23:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, I guess I'll keep it. I hate giving up even on a small project. xD  01:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken and thicken the shading along the back please? 18:57, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done :3  14:48, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to center the ear pink and blur the shading. 16:07, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and blurred the shading. 21:12, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad and make the ear pink visible. It's visible but it looks odd. 23:03, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and fixed the earpink. 01:43, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Beechstar (L) - Tweaked
I just burned it to make it darker and tweaked the eyes 'cause they didn't make sense to me XD <span style="">03:16 Sat Nov 19

OA was Echomist <span style="">03:17 Sat Nov 19

Wow, that was fast :D Perhaps just a little darker? 03:18, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hey, I all I had to do was burn it XD <span style="">03:24 Sat Nov 19

The little strip of fur between the front legs seems odd as in there's no shading or it doesn't match the rest of the pelt. Perhaps darken that little section there. Awesome! 04:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">03:59 Sun Nov 20

Blur between the legs just a little bit :3 22:27, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">02:08 Tue Nov 22

Could you try and dull the highlights? If you don't want to, then that's fine. 18:55, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

If nobody sees a problem with it, I'm just going to redo it. The shading is weird, there's a lot of blurred lineart, and triangle tabbies aren't the most genetically accurate. Speak now or forever hold your peace. <span style="">08:53 Wed Nov 23

Go ahead Wildy =3  15:18, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Kay this is just taking up space. I haven't had the chance to redo this 'cause I'm still grounded from the computer (all my edits are done illicitly) so somebody can archive this and I'll repost it when I have the time. (Don't delete my reservation, though!) <span style="">04:31 Fri Nov 25

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Had to look more like his warrior charart. OA was Insaneular, and I'm guessing it was tweaked later on by Goldenpaw. I got all the colors from his warrior charart. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:30, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little more. 16:50, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done, how does it look? ^-^ M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   17:11, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the stripes a tad? Looks great! 21:36, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink on the right ear. <span style="">22:19 Sun Nov 20

Reuploaded Defined the stripes and the earpink. 01:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes need to be a lot sharper to match the other images. <span style="">03:28 Wed Nov 23

I'll try to work on it Saturday, since tomorrow is Thanksgiving, sorry.. Dx  03:49, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Re-did the stripes. 00:59, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. 13:13, November 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink a tad. 16:22, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Bramble with major tweaks by Elorisa, needed to match her other images. Comments? 18:42, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading/define the shading in the eyes. This is lovely. :3 18:45, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Defined the eye shading. 19:45, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. It looks a little small. <span style="">22:16 Sun Nov 20

The base coat looks a bit greyer than the warrior. Either saturate it, and try ad match best you can, or color pick from a place there's there's not shading on the warrior image, like the top of the muzzle. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:37, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Stoneclaw? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:30, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I am still here. 18:06, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (R)~ Tweaked
It needed tuffed ears. 23:42, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add more "poof" to the brown ear. <span style="">23:48 Sun Nov 20 Tufts. <span style="">00:21 Mon Nov 21

His ear farthest from us(his brown ear)needs to look more tutfed. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 12:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, that's exactly what Sweetflower said. Please refrain from repeating comments ;3 -- 21:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 01:48, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the tufts look more like the orange/yellow ear? <span style="">02:30 Thu Nov 24

Not really with the way its shaped. 21:21, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewater (W) - Tweaked
Yeah, I know it's smudged. There's no other way I can't make the shading so obvious on a white cat xD Anywho, needed darker, blurred, and thicker shading. OA was Bramble. 21:45, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, I dont see anything wrong othr then darken the shading at the tail base - 21:54, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Try your best to blur the shading/highlights. 08:36, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...why not just re-do it, but follow the exact same style. This needs to be blurred a /lot/. 18:53, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redone, I'll lighten the shading if needed. 20:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Please on the neck and hindquarters just a little. ^^ <span style="">02:28 Thu Nov 24

Center the ear pink and blur the shading a lot. *steals* Tis mines! 04:53, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Don't know if changes are showing. -- 21:34, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftfoot(MC) - Tweaked
Yea, yea I know about the gray at the bottom. I'll fix that in the next upload - 19:07, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah and OA was Spottedwing - 19:08, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

nevermind, I fixed it - 19:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and the highlights are sorta blotchy. 02:17, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, don't tell Bloo what's wrong. Tell her how to fix it. Also not everyone uses highlights. Don't make the assumption that they do. But yes, Bloo, blur the shading and the earpink some. <span style="">03:32 Wed Nov 23

Reuploaded- That's as blurred as it gets - 21:58, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

When I say highlights, I usually mean the lighter part that's not shaded xD It's way too much effort to write, "Blur the haunch highlights. And by highlights I mean the part where there's not shading on his haunch." That's the way it used to be. Not everyone used highlights, yes, but people knew what you were talking about if you said highlights. Anyway. Blur the earpink. 01:05, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still blotchy. Try darken it a little bit. That should fill in the gaps. Center the ear pink and maybe add some shading to the herbs. 04:55, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - @Oblivion yea, I know right? I just say the "unshaded part" so people wont yell at me xD@Sand the medicine already have enough shading on it, it looked pretty fine to me 21:36, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Graymist (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows and it needed to be long-haired. Comments? 20:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose gray and brighten the earpink just a tad. Great job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:55, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a tad? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 21:56, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:04, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Flora (Ro) ~ Tweaked
--Patches need to be darker, original artist- Minnowclaw/Swallowtip with shading tweaks by me. 21:29, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudges. This image looks much better now. 21:31, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! :3 01:16, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken all the patches so they all match each other. Cloudy's right; this does look much better ^^ <span style="">03:34 Wed Nov 23

Reuploaded. Yay, ;) 16:48, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) - Redone
Is it okay for it to be redone? Original artist was Grayravenpaw, with tweaks by Ivystripe, and it needed to match the other images. Comments? 21:37, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

If it needed to match, of course it could be redone. Darken the shading. 21:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:14, November 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * dies* Crap I wanted to do this! Define the scars, thicken the lineart on the far ear tear, and blur the shading. 00:25, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, sorry. :P 00:36, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the belly shading and blur all of the shading. Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:56, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 02:11, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

The scars still need to be defined more. 00:14, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:29, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (MC) - Redone
I can't even really believe that I made this. I talked it over with a few of the leads, and they agreed that she badly needed to be redone, no offense to the OA who was Ashshadow. It was pixily, blurry, blotchy, and I don't even think it had any shading. Also, before you complain about the stripes, Iceheart said it is the artist's choice whether or not to give a tortie stripes. I've never seen it done so I wanted to give it a go. Comments for improvement? =) 03:44, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is fantastic, Ivy! Define/brighten the ear-pink a bit more, define the stripes by her ear, maybe add some to the patch on her muzzle, and define the shading on the herbs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:02, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on the tail a tiny bit, and blur it? It kind of looks like the patches abruptly stopped. This is AMAZING. 06:18, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink more visible? This is amazing! o3o 22:12, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bettah? Sorry it took me a while to reupload, I've got some other things to do D:  03:08, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lionheart (W)- Tweaked
Bahahaaha. FAIL. xD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 21:36, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

To avoid Atelda eating me, Oa is Dawnfeather. He needed thicker fur around the neck. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 22:09, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

No offense...but how is this thicker fur? I had no idea what it was until you posted this comment. Imo, it looks nothing like fur. It just looks like a black zig-zag...like a black scar. I'm not sure how to fix it, because I'm blank of ideas right now. Icestorm not signed in

I suggest thickening the fur on both sides of his neck. 22:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

How's this? (fail. X_X) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 22:43, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Better, just erase the lines in the middle of his neck. 00:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 00:57, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It didn't change o.o 01:02, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Changes might not be showing. :P <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 01:06, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

But I'm looking at the thumbnails for this version and its previous version, and they're the exact same. Normally, even if changes aren't showing, the thumbnail shows the changes. Anyway, I'll just wait :D 01:09, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the changes are showing for me, and sometimes it doesn't even show in the history. :/ <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 01:13, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Put some shading on the fluffeh part. :3 04:21, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. X_X <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 19:28, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It kinda freaks me out x3. Add a bit more shading? Kinda hard to tell where it is for me. 23:07, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I know, eh? XD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 23:30, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaller. <span style="">00:20 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 01:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the colours are starting to look kinda green-tinged... is it just me, or does anybody else see it? I'd say if you won't change the colours you definitely need to darken the shading and considerably lighten whatever shading you have on the edges of the mane-thingie so it looks like the parts closer to him are in shade and the parts that stick out aren't. I don't know if any of what I just said made sense XD <span style="">04:40 Fri Nov 25

If you look right above the part where you shaded on the tuft, you can see a drastic change in.. I don't know if that's shading or what. But can you smooth it out? You'll know what it would be if you see it xD -- 21:29, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (W) - Tweaked
I know this looks like it was redone, but I just redid the shading and desaturated the colour. OA was Bramble, tweaked by Nightshine. 23:03, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on the paws farthest from us? This looks great. 02:28, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you can blur the shading a bit? (If I'm wrong, just ignore me :P) 02:05, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

It honestly cannot be blurred any more. 03:53, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

If you can't blur it anymore, could you either a) lighten the shading or b) darken the non-shaded areas? :P <span style="">04:36 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. 20:20, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Jag (Ro) ~ Redone
He was on the redo list because he needed to match his caveguard. The OA is Frostheart♥. Comments? 23:55, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Where's the earpink? XDD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 23:58, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud on the forehead. ^^ :P <span style="">01:52 Thu Nov 24

Define the highlights on the back leg's haunch. 23:05, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm dumb. I forgot teh earpink. -_- 01:00, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink, mon ami? :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 03:09, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - Tweaked
I made him gray-white, before he looked like gray-cream. OA is Darkhallows ,10:59,November 24,2011 (UTC)

Two of his paws are darker than the grey on his body. Lighten them up. 19:43, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,20:45,November 24,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad. 22:58, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white into the gray on the tail a little bit more. <span style="">23:00 Thu Nov 24

Whitefang (W) ~ Tweaked
Yes, I know he wasn't on the list, but, since I'm the OA, I am allowed to fix it. That shading was bothering the living daylights out of me. It needed to be re-done, badly. Comments? 00:13, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Some white pixils are on the tail. <span style="">00:18 Fri Nov 25

Those aren't white... I think it's waste from a different layer. Thanks for pointing that out. 00:19, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:20, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the tail? Nice job! 01:01, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:56, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) - Redone
OA was Mousetalon, then it was tweaked by Oblivion and Icy I think... Anyway, the shading was blotchy and the shade of cream didn't match her kit, so I did it over. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:37, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lookin' good. Blur the shading a lot and thin out the shading on the chest and haunch. <span style="">04:43 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. @Wild Luv ya! :) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:58, November 25, 2011 (UTC)