Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Braveheart (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar12, redone with permission by Scarletwind; unrealistic tabby stripes. Comments? 00:13, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, and the stripes look painted on after the shading, could you darken the areas of the stripes in the shading? 01:07, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I did the stripes before the shading, but I defined the shading on them anyway. 01:11, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes to the legs? 02:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I like how you did this one ^^ Darken the shading a couple percent. 08:04 Wed Dec 21

Pretty ^^ Can you dull the earpink a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this, Misty? 19:17, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's been eight days. I'm pretty sure she's not working on this  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  18:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. Anyone who wants this can take over. 18:58, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I will. 21:31, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it fine that I re-did this again? And I'm back! 22:00, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the stripes and define the shading. Wb!

Reuploaded Heh, I had to use Pixlr. 00:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I love his pattern <3 03:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. Move the shading inward more. 05:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Didn't know how else to do it without ruining the image. 21:33, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and earpink, darken the shading, and try to make the stripes look more like stripes (ie not all the same width) and less like pencil-markings :P 01:21 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded Gross. 02:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The tail stripes should match his body's. 00:04, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 17:29, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Willie (R) ~ Redone
The stripes, muzzle, and shading needed a little work so I just redid it. Comments? 08:18, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot: who the OA is, why it needed to be redone, and if you had permission to redo it. Blur the shading and stripes. 08:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It is on the Redo list, Icy. Define his lighter muzzle, and add triangle stripes over his eyes. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 10:34, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

He was never actually shown with color anywhere, despite his description, so he should be colorless (unless the default tabby color applies to him) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  11:02, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think it does. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 11:16, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

He was on the cover of The Heart of a Warrior. Make his stripe pattern more like his manga picture, blur the ear-pink. 16:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

What is the default tabby color? 08:17, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brown. ^^ Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 09:13, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. 20:38, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define or add a lighter muzzle. It looks like a highlight right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:30, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Violet (KP) - Tweak
I'm pretty sure that this still needs to be lighter, since I withdrew last time...If I'm wrong, then, decline this. I got the earpink from the kit, which is the correct color image... Comments...? 03:06, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot. OA was Nightfall101 03:41, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yep it needs to be paler, not lighter. Just make the image more pale a tad more. 20:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^  ✧Twi✧    Happy New Year~!  04:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

it looks kinda grey O__O Mind making it more orange or sumthin? - 06:47, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

It's just your Computer, BlueOrca. It's fine. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 22:12, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

o.e Fixing a broken span tag. 22:14, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Compare it to her kit image. The other one looks way more saturated - 22:42, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Tweaked
My first tweak :3 OA was Icestorm123 and the shading needed to be blurred. 13:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I had reserved this, but I don't want to take away your glory ;3 I'll be happy to give it to you ;D Blur the shading a bit still. 05:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

facepalm* I'm sorry! Anyways, '''Re-Uploaded. ''' 14:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail tip. 14:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 15:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks like she has a gray tail tip, and not a highlight.. Can you fix that? 15:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. 20:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:23, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes lighter and brighter, and redden the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:27, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to me like it's only on the outside of the image and in. Lighten the back, darken the neck, lighten some of the legs and tail, and shade behind the shoulders. Breeze whisker  15:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. I re-did the tail shading because it was giving me a headache. :P 18:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and lighten all the shading. 01:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, including the eyes, so it matches the queen. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for a better idea of what the shading placement should look like, and blur all the shading. 22:39 Sun Jan 1

Leafstar (L) - Redone
I refuse to cause more drama over a redone image, so if you don't think this should be redone, go ahead and decline it, it's not worth the fighting. But the cream looked like highlights and that needed to be fixed. It'd be kind of ridiculous to ask anyone to fix that without redoing though. I'm planning to do all the images. OA was Bramble. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

She's so cute! Blur the patches. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:35, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Gotta fight for what you believe in. ;) It's lovely, though I've never been fond of the nonsensical pattern of brown with cream blotches. I wouldn't mind seeing it changed to something that makes a bit more sense... However, that's entirely up to you. ^^ 16:21, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

My cat is a light brown with a few little cream spots, so it's somewhat possible xD Define the shading a tad bit on the tail. 17:43, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little bit. As I said in the chat Paleclaw, lovely <3 18:57, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

If Since you're planning to redo the images, could I at least do the queen since I'm the OA? *puppy dog eyes* 22:26, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - If you can find a photo of a brown and cream tabby, I'd be happy to copy the pattern, but I personally couldn't, so I just went with the style that this used to have. XD And I yes you can Ivy, as I said on your talk page. :P Did all the other things told. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:17, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I can do that. ^^ Let's see, this is what you're working with now, which is basically a torbie (for those of you creeping on this post that don't know what that is, it's a tabby/tortie). This is one interpretation of a cream and brown tabby, which is a just a cream tabby with brown stripes (like Tigerstar on the Tigerstar and Sasha covers). Then there's this guy who is a brown tabby with cream underparts (notice that the stripes are always the same color and don't change over the cream). Hope that helps. ^^ 01:30, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

That last one seems like the most accurate. I'd say go with him. 01:37, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I liked the old one better, but here ya go. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail (K) Redone
Dear lord help me.....i despise this image....I hate it with a passion....*shudders* Ick, comment? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:59, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the brown quite matches, and darken the shading. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 05:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Took the colors from her queen image....should I Daddy? *Waits for the no like in the chat* And i'll get right on it, daddy. *noms Daddy.* Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 05:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the dapples. 05:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink, blur the patches, and add shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has shading, i'll do all that in a sec. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 15:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:56, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on her face come up to the point as it does on her other chararts. And the black patch on --> this side extends onto her leg in the other chararts. Also, it looks a bit dark, comparatively. 20:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has either blurred/miscolored line art on both of her front legs. 20:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It suppoesed to be like that, its her dapples.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, there's actually blurred lineart there. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm....I see it. I'll get to it tommorrow, Leaving today. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Nightcloud (Q) ~ Tweaked
First tweak as a warrior (: Okay, any way, OA was Insaneular, then Leggy took care of the eyes and Ivystripe took care of the nose. Okay, comments for improvement? 05:22, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten it up some, I can hardly see the lineart. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 05:50, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

What needed to be done? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:16, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It was the highlights. It was on the Tweak Week list. 17:19, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 17:44, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, sorry, forgot to mention why it needed to be tweaked. =P Any way, re-uploaded. Comments? 05:03, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

If highlights are optional, why did they have to be added? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 22:09, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think they need to, I think it was because it just didn't match the warrior, and you can still make it look the same without highlights. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:33, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Ya, but also, I don't use highlights. 22:46, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think the warrior should be tweaked anyway, so I don't suppose you have to match it with highlights. x_x Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:48, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (Ki) ~ Redone
Aww, who's a cute little tyrant? 8D ... Comments? 03:11, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah. OA was Scarletwind, I believe. I think so... that's what the file history says, at least. 03:12, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

He was so adorable before he decided to take over the world! Make the pale chest look more furry~ 03:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

He's so fluffy, you almost forget that he's trying to kill the clans, maybe shrink/blur the earpink on this --> side. 23:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:25, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Silverstream (W.Alt.) - Tweaked
I wonder why It wast been tweaked before... it needed to be longhaired, I havent changed the pattern or something, it just tweaked. OA is Rainwillow and I owe her work so much. ,09:46,December 30,2011 (UTC)

There's some waste in front of the chest fluff 16:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,17:23,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 22:40 Sun Jan 1

Blackstar (Ro) Redone
I got permission for Iceheart to redo him instead of making it a tweak. His pelt colored bothered me; I felt it was too close to white. First redo as a warrior (Not on the list yet, but I've had 4 chararts approved) 12:27, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

AGIN! Its rogue, no rougue! ,13:51,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Leaf, chill, its just a typo, it can be fixed. Lighten the shading a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Chill Leafstorm, and spell correctly if you're going to correct. Shouldn't the black go up farther on his legs to match his leader? Breeze whisker  16:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just reread that. I didn't mean to sound so rude. Sorry Leaf. ^^; Breeze  whisker  16:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. 17:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love Blackstar! The back black paws should be a little more black. 17:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, if they're any darker than you won't be able to see the lineart 17:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant raise to black up or something xD Blur the earpink alittle bit - 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah sorry. I meant to raise it up so it's level with the front. 17:42, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot the back black paws. 20:51, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black and enlarge the earpink. 20:53, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more - 20:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And blur said shafing. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the black in the ears. <span style="">22:41 Sun Jan 1

Blur and lighten the shading more - 00:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerstar (W) ~ Redone
Hmmph. Who said it'd take me a long time to do these images? Comments? 20:43, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller 23:20, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Either define the tail scars or blur the side scars more, they look different. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 22:06, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

They're different because he has a fluffy tail; they wouldn't stand out. 23:35, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

I assure you, the scars match the deputy charart exactly. And the ear-pik is an appropriate size. 00:07, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad and this will be perfect :3 <span style="">00:12 Mon Jan 2

Re-uploaded. 00:26, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Crookedstar (D) - Redone
Needed to match the alt leader which is now his main image. OA was Insaneular with a redo by Icestorm123. I did take the crooked mouth off of his old deputy. *squeals* This makes me so happy! The earpink is bugging me big time 00:08, December 31, 2011 (UTC)


 * D I love Crookedstar. There seems to be some waste near/in his mouth. ^-^ 00:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hehe oops  16:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt L. 2) ~ Tweaked
I needed to make him more brownish, since I think this alt image is going to replace his old real image. OA = me. Comments? 00:14, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Does the heading need to say For Approval? I thought it was Tweak/Redone. <span style="">01:07, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Heh heh. Oops. XD I fixed the heading. 05:25, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

One thing to point out. He doesn't have stripes, does he? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 06:56, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

His old image had stripes. No one really had a problem with them. Would look kinda boring without them. Then again, Pinestar is sort of a boring cat. XD I think they should stay. 07:16, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Pssh. Whatever then. :3 Make the earpink more visible then. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 07:19, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Purdy (Lo) - Redone
Needed to match other images (mottles, torn ears, stripes, etc) so I redid him. Idk if he was on the list, but I had permission anyway :P OA was Icestorm, I think. Comments? <span style="">02:43 Sat Dec 31

D8 Wildy is back! Erm... hmm. Define the ear-pink a little. Beside that, I see nothing to change. 03:20, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's sad that I'm back? D8 <span style="">21:35 Sun Jan 1

Owlwhisker (W) - Redone
It was on the list for redoing. The stripes needed to be redone. OA was Sandstar12. Comments for improvements? 19:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

it doesnt look brown,..did you take the color from the old pic? .__. - 19:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^ If anything, now, it's the shading. 20:12, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Maybe try thicken the stripes a bit? ,20:21,December 31,2011 (UTC)

OHHHh Now I see it! 8D Define the tail stripes. - 20:27, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 02:21, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Q) - Redone
Paley...I'm so sorry for ruining your perfect design DX OA was me and ever since it got approved, I've felt it still looked bad and I'm surprised it wasn't redone before. Needed cream and to match the leader. 21:59, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the cream meets the brown. Nonsense, it's lovely. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:11, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Are you kidding, this is better than my image! XD Darken the shading a bit and blur the stripes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:59, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I don't think the shade of cream quite matches the leader. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 03:46, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I sent Ivy the xcf, so it should be fine.... XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:12, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W)~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the others. OA was Icestorm and Riverpelt. 23:01, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. 23:36, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- I just uploaded it without right before your comment. 23:37, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The shading seems to be a teensy bit too dark, there looks like there's possibly waste on the front foot, I don't know, it's just an out of place darkder area. Smudge the belly a little more, and the foot didn't have a brown stripe on the toes. I suppose I'm supposed to tweak mine to have a cream hind foot? 00:41, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Well the app image is already approved with a cream foot, so ya. 01:00, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Gorsestar~ Redone
There was a lot wrong with this image so i just redid it, if anyone disagrees Ill try to tweak it. OA was Shigura, with tweaks by Bramble and me. 00:38, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more contrast to the eyes and blur the shading slightly. Pretty :3 <span style="">22:43 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded- 01:10, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Gorseclaw (TC) (W) ~ Redone
Poor Gorseclaw, I think he's chopped liver in this situation XD Needed to be redone to match Tigerstar. OA was Echomist. I got permission. Comments? 01:37, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and darken the shading. 02:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you're gonna give him a pale belly too, make it go all the way up to his muzzle. Lovely job. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  02:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Paleh :3 I was actually just about to ask about the pale belly. 02:20, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

And add some pale-ness in the small belly area behind the front leg :3 04:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded DerP. How did I mish that? :3 04:14, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
She needed to be redone to match others she was on the list. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 03:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the unshaded bits brighter, they sorta look shiny on the other images. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 03:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda greenish. Make her a little more orange. 03:33, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:10, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Troutclaw (E) - Redone
Stripes were unnatural, ear-pink was too bright, shading needed to be redone, and more. OA was Minnowclaw, I think. 23:53, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (E) - Redone
OA was Minnowclaw. Stripes were strange, shading was almost non-existent, and ear-pink was too neon. Comments? 00:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ro) - Redone
There was blurred lineart and the whole images just looked odd. OA was Mumble785. 01:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)