Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 36

Dewkit (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Roo, and had blotchy shading/highlights. 12:50, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her body  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 19:11, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:49, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky Molto bene 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out and blur the chest, paws, and tail tip feathering; it looked a bit choppy 23:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste, Trolly. ^^; Also, blur the ear pink. 03:05, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add the slightest tad more opacity to the shading. *thought Cloudy was Sky e3e* 08:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yea, blur the shading, too. Forgot to mention that up ^^^there. Dazzle did what now? =P  09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge that hard edged bit off to the right on the white on the tail? How did you mistake her for my awesomeness? xD Sky Molto bene 12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 09:00, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on it. It will be up later. 11:09, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded This would have been up earlier today, but I woke up and 3:30 AM and I haven't gone to sleep since >_>. (It's 4:42 PM now, so.. xD.) 20:42, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the white? 01:47, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I'll blur it a bit, since if I blur it too much it will look really bad, and if I don't blur it, people will say I need to. (Waiting for a few more comments before editing.) 10:46, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head a bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  00:27, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Not just the head shading...blur the rest of it too. 04:50, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the white by the whiskers a tad, just a little. 14:09, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Silver. According to the guidelines, you have two weeks to get a redone image done. It's been well over that, so I must decline this. 04:43, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over, if that is okay. 20:11, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Just make sure to reserve it. =) 20:12, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank ya Cloudy. ;3 I don't know why, but these ones are a pain in the neck to make in my opinion... =_= 20:29, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink and blur the shading. Also, I love bi-colored cats. These styles are my favorites. xD 20:30, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the earpink and blurred shading.. They will forever be annoying to me, Cloudy x3 00:41, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

The smudges look big and awkward. Try smudging more with a smaller brush. 01:04, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink :3 09:19, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the white, it looks grey. Skt Dalek Caan 10:00, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the smudges, defined the earpink and lightened the shading. 19:28, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:30, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (D) - Tweaked
There are so many changes to this file, it's hard to keep track.. But the first OA was Sandy, with the most recent redo by Iceheart. He needed a floofy tail. 17:51, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the tail pweeze. Maybe make it a bit pineconey, kinda like Squirrelflight's? 23:55, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Or, if you want him to have a bottlebrush tail, go nuts with it. Yeah, that's a ferret's tail, but it's the first pic I found of a nutso bottlebrush tail. 00:14, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more 'floof' to the bottom where it's straight, kinda like the warrior? 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dat floof >:C 20:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the tail lineart some more. 21:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

See my comment on the warrior. I can't; there simply aren't enough pixels to fit all that 21:43, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's two black pixels inside the tail. 18:55, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, technically there's three black pixels, but same thing xD Can you possibly just add one more layer of pixels to the fluffy tail? (sorry if you can't, but it just looks so thin...) 14:05, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Really, I would love to add another layer since it seems to make you guys so happy, but I can't. I've no idea why, but it just ends up looking like a blob. 02:01, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Want me to fix it for ya? 02:12, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Eh sure, why not, since I fail. 02:12, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:33, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:30, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (W) - Tweaked
Fluffff <3 OA was Insane with a redo by Iceheart. 18:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the bushy-ness more even at the top of the tail, it kind of dips. 21:59, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

And make the lines on the tail thicker. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't make the lines on the tail thicker or it won't look the same. Trust me. The same applies for the deputy. 20:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it a bit.... crazier to match the deputy? XD And there's like two random black pixels inside the tail near the base. 07:24, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think the line art does need thickened. Just in some of the weaker-looking places so that it somewhat matches the rest of the line art. Breeze whisker  14:52, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. See my comments on the deputy about the whole pixels thing. 02:03, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

I see a couple of white pixels in the tail. Skt Dalek Caan 02:15, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the lineart for Loon. 18:29, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:30, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) ~ Redone
I planned on just tweaking this, but I thought she looked more light brown instead of dark cream so I redid her instead. I can go back and actually tweak the image if that would be better. I didn't think it had to be nominated again. Also, would being a cream cat qualify her as a tabby since it is a form of ginger? Breeze whisker  03:55, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the earpink. Maybe you could put in some faint stripes? Sky Exterminate! 04:33, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. That's a bit of a question... you see, all cats are tabbies. All of them, even if you can only see a few stripes on the forehead and tail in the right light. However, it's cats with the red gene that tend to show stripes more easily than, say, a black or white cat would (actually, not all ginger cats are tabbies, just fyi. Just most). However, in a red so dilute as to be any kind of cream, which is red mixed with brown, it's iffy as to whether or not she's have stripes. I'd say it's up to you, but since she's never been described with stripes I'd leave them out, personally.

And that is what Shelly does at quarter to 1 AM when she's online. 04:45, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

In short, Shelly does not want to add stripes to Daisy. Shelly does not even want to touch Daisy again. But if one cream cat is given stripes, suddenly there will be a movement among bored members of PCA trying to lobby to give all cream cats stripes, and Shelly will be forced to touch the Daisy again. And please don't make that happen. 05:00, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

We've had this discussion before, actually...but, I think it was said that would be going too far. Also, StarClan forbid Shelly need to touch Daisy again...that would be...really bad. 05:06, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think it could be an optional thing, but then again, it might lead onto "You should add stripes" and blah blah blah. Sky Exterminate! 09:53, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the shading looks greyish. Fix that? :3 Sky Exterminate! 01:29, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks more blue that gray... o3o. Still, fix it as Sky said. 10:48, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it a bit smaller c; 09:48, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't reuploaded. I'll get there. But I meant for the shading to be of a bluish tint. It's a dark blue set on a multiply layer and I'd rather keep it. Breeze whisker  20:07, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Add a pupil.. She doesn't have one o.o  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 00:38, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't put stripes on her. And isn't the eye artist's choice? Breeze whisker  16:54, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

yes, but this is like how the blank looks without any eyecolor in it, if I'm seeing correctly. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 19:10, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice, Elo. Personally, I think it's fine how it is. 05:35, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours since last upload and comment for improvement. 23:30, March 24, 2012 (UTC)