Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Tweaking=

Russetfur (W) - Please somebody take over
Meh, Froon convinced me to get off my lazy butt and do a charart :] This charart was originally supposed to be tweaked, but I was having issues with the shading, so I just redid it :P 02:50, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit more ;3 First Foxleap, and now Russetfur... We think alike cuz' ;D 03:19, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Change the file name to Russetfur.warrior.png so it replaces the old one. 03:21, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, the changes aren't showing xP Oh, and I can't make it a .png because my computer won't let me upload it if it's a .png. 03:58, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

And FYI, the changes don't show when I first put the picture there for me too, but they appear after you publish it. Odd. Lol. 04:19, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think you're meant to say who did the charart before it was tweaked? I believe it was Dawnleaf :D. This is really pretty. Lighten the earpink though and there is a garbage around the top of the tail, a brown pixel I think :3 This is good Nighty! ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 08:07, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Earpink looks really blotchy; I'll fix it in the next upload. 23:44, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

You should continue the stripes into the face, so it looks more natural instead of just the body and tail. 13:51, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I honestly think that this looks amazing with or without stripes in the face. ;) But I think the ear pink could be blurred a little more; it seems to straight on the bottom edge to me. 21:26, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit. 16:45, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe try to lighten the ear pink just a bit? With her pelt color it is hard to see it. But other than that, the pelt, stripes, shading and blurring looks amazing!Fallenstars 04:29, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

If you can, could you make her a little more ginger, she looks brown to me. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:43, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

It looks close to the color it was before, I THINK it should stay the color it is, I may be wrong however. And there is a pixel outside her tail, get rid of that, this is a very lovely image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it to match her deputy image, and I can barely see the earpink, though defining it wouldn't be the answer, 'couse it's already sharp-edged. And who said she has stripes?- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 06:29, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

@Kittycat - She was never revealed to have stripes, but it isn't possible for a ginger cat not to have them. So basically we're tweaking all ginger cats to have stripes. 17:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nightflower left the wiki (says on her profile), so someone can take over this. 14:59, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) - Tweaked
- Re-did did shading and brightened highlights. I tried a new way of doing shading, and I like it x3. Please don't tell me to blur the shoulder highlight. It can't be blurred anymore. 23:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's a bit dark compared to her other images. 23:56, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Nice! Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's because of the shading + highlights. Er, Re-Uploaded xD 00:38, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste around the charart around her haunch area. Make the earpink bigger. 01:04, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see the waste on GIMP 02:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can see it, want me to circil it for you? If not, It is under her foot, under her belly, near her foot, and above her back. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

OH I know why it isnt showing you, because, it is so pale, it looks like it isn't there, but if you lean in close, you can see it, it is there, but just BARLEY there. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:48, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

It is not there at all on GIMP. I can't fix it if I can't see it. 21:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

When I had a hard time seeing the waste on my Ivypool image, I put a colored background behind her as a new layer, maybe that could help you see it? Because I could never see it when people told me until I did that 22:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Where's the light source? I can't really tell... and darken the tail shading. 19:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's some shading waste above and below her back leg. 20:34, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I darkened the tail shading. Shellheart, I can't remove it because no matter how close I look in GIMP, it's not there. 13:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I can remove it for you, want me to? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:08, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm shall be gone until August 25th, so please don't decline this due to lack of work ;3 00:41, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I know it isn't your problem, but can you define the earpink? 16:59, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt. W) - Tweaked
The original artist was Feathermoon. I just made him gray. 03:19, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Darken the shading a tad and add/darken the shading under the chin. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 03:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:27, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can see a bit of waste around the head and neck. Please erase it that this'll be pretty much ready. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 03:40, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yay. :) 03:47, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wouldn't it just be his default warrior image, since we went with the silver description only with his elder charart? 12:43, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around. But the image looks good! @Shellheart, Longtail's alt. warrior is for the period of time when he was not an elder, but he had been attacked by the rabbit and had scars. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:26, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

He was attacked in FQ, there is a slighty waste under his forepaw closest to us, and und his haunch, and darken the shading a tad, I can't see it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 15:55, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe. One of Feathermoon's chararts. xD Anyways, good job Rainy. I know you're not required to do this, but...umm... Can you thicken the lineart by the nick in his ear? It seems too thin. 18:30, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Other than that, it looks good. 19:00, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The waste isn't showing on my comp... Can you specify where I missed it? 04:17, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's some between the ears, along the spine, and on the underside of the tail. Maybe go into the shading layer and fill the background with a color to see if the waste shows up. That's what I do with Photoshop. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:12, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I won't be able to re-upload this until I get back next week. Did we decide on how long TW was being extended? 13:16, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think it was said till the end of the month, not sure. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:23, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

There is a LOT of waste by the way, all the way around his cahrart, color the background, to see it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:25, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I use the layers too, that way you can easily see and erase the waste. There's some on the back. 17:19, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) Tweaked
The entire image needed tweaking. So I re-did the stripe, darkened the highlights, fixed up the ear pink, and played with the shading. I also added depth in the eye. Comments? 16:04, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on his leg needs blurred, also the bottom of his haunch. 17:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights, make the stripe thicker, and blur it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 17:36, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 18:50, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

It says his left ear is torn, so tear that. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:54, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Tore his left ear, blurred the haunch shading, toned down the highlights, and tweaked the stripe. Comments? (By the way, on August 14th, if this isn't approved, I won't be able to work on this or any other of my images, considering that I'll be gone. Anyone can take over) 18:04, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste near his ear and back. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Removed. 20:41, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading a bit or darken the highlights. And I can't really see the stripe through all the shading, so maybe darken that too? Also, blur the shading a tad. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 20:57, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Im pretty sure that you tore the right ear,. not the left.Bluestar11796 22:28, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark, if you make the stripe much darker, it'll be pure black. Make it more like his warrior image and I think it'll be good :3 23:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are the changes showing? If they are, there is still a pixel by his ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I lightened the shading. 13:51, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. :3 15:53, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing, but Frostheart, I can't anymore. It's blurred to maximum. 15:55, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The stripe blends into the shading, define it. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  22:34, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure you're supposed to tear the ear on HIS left, not our left. 18:00, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripe could be a little darker, like his warrior image. I might be mistaken, though, because his warrior image has a little lighter shading. 19:37, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripe and thicken it. 18:05, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (K) - Redone
She needed to be redone as a long-haired and the original artist was FirePelt. 14:44, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Try reuploading over the old one. The new changes aren't even showing in the history, sadly. 18:26, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

They still aren't showing, but you can see it on the second file in her file history. xP

Blue the patches a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:16, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes still aren't showing. 20:29, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

The patch on her face on the left (her right) needs to come down a tad to match her apprentice. 21:14, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:52, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, define the earpink, and there's still waste near the right ear. 16:27, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing for some of you. xP 18:16, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I can see it; it does n't have waste now. :D The right earpink looks a bit blotchy; smoothen it out. 18:47, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be nit picky but on her apprentice charart, the gray patch isn't on her muzzle. On her right side of the face, the gray isn't supposed to be on her muzzle. Maybe smudge it up closer to her eye. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 17:34, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 20:56, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W) - Redone
My Ravenpaw image needs to be archived, so this isn't over the limit. Changes aren't showing. Original artist was Bramble, Shimmerpool, and tweaked by Moonflight. Her color was too bright. So I made her champagne colored, which is dark red. I don't like this, I think it either needs to be blurred somewhere or her shading is a little wonky (her chin shading) 19:13, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lightne her a tad, and brighten the highlights.(MUCH better, no offense to anyone.) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 19:18, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The pelt color or shading? I think I should lighten the shading, but just making sure what you mean :3 19:25, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading, her pelt color is fine. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:32, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It should be the second one in the history 19:40, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

This looks too red, I think you should just make it dark ginger, which is more like a red-brown color. 19:47, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

You are looking at the right one, right? This hasn't been showing, and I just want to make sure 19:49, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize the shading a bit more, and spread out the highlights. Looks good! 20:26, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, this is much better. Other from what Atelda says, I can find nothing wrong. Excellent job! 21:32, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Rainy, this is a sickly red color, not dark ginger. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:16, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I went back to square one. On the one that says color test, please lok at it and see if the color looks satisfying. It's much easier to recolor my image when it's not blurred or smudged. I will take care of everything else once the color is satisfactory. 23:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

That one looks better, just make it a little bit more ginger. :3 00:00, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Check the color now, it should be the second one, it's a little lighter than the others surrounding it 00:44, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Personaly, I liked the one you had up before, but I geuss the 2nd one is okay, just make the stripes on it a little less brown, and a bit more red-ginger, alright? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:14, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I liked it too, but a few people thought I needed to change it. I'll fix that and go ahead and add shading and stuff 03:28, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I rather like the color 21:07, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the white paw. 22:22, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the tail stripes match the rest of the stripes? <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:58, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's all based off a realistic marbled pattern. I mean, I can. 23:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and tore her ear, as well, since I forgot to do that 02:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

The torn ear looks too round, make it more triangular. 21:39, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:36, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste inside her torn ear, get rid of that, and it should be ready, this is really pretty^^ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:38, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:43, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading in between her shoulder and haunch. 13:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:33, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the flank. This is looking really nice! <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 17:36, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Change upthe tail stripes. They dont really match the rest of the image. 15:43, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes aren't showing 15:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (Q)~ Tweaked
Original artist was Icethroat. I blurred the shading, fixed the nose colour, and when i was adding dapples i kinda ruined the patches, so i blurred/smudged them and i know it doesnt match the other images, but they're already on the to be tweaked list. Comments? 20:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Changes arent showing. 20:37, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:04, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the tail. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:30, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded- 19:41, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patch on the head a bit to match her other patches. 22:05, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Tweaked
Original artist was Mousetalon. Earpink needed to be consistent, and she needed darker shading. 02:58, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I've put the image into Photoshop and circled problems:

Green is where the thing that is circled with green (shading/highlights) needs to be blurred. Orange circle is lighten up shading a tad. And blue circles are where the lineart has become pale and you need to make it black again.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 09:01, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back and tail. The shading doesn't need to be lightened. And blur the earpink. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:06, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:53, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the middle shading, darken the tail shading, and blur the earpink more. 18:28, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:04, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the back. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:47, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I did, are you seeing the right one? 16:53, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. 19:17, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (E) ~ Tweaked (Redone)
Original artist was Sandy. I ended up re-doing the charart so the colors matches her SC charart. Changes aren't showing yet. Comments? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:50, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 18:23, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the graying muzzle slightly lighter or oranger to make it more natural looking. --Frosted Apple 19:29, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes still aren't showing up... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken ze shadin'. :3 15:19, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 17:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a little dark compared to her sharpclaw 03:03, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (A) - Tweaked (Redone)
Original artist was Bramble and he needed stripes. I had to redo him so he would match his warrior image. 18:05, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Try uploading it again, so the changes show in the file history. 18:21, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 18:23, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlighted part (the non-shaded part) a bit. 20:07, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 21:02, August 16, 2011 (UTC)