Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Birchfall ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded the whole article and added quite a few quotes. Comments? 02:09, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Definatly try to expand Fading Echos, other than that, it looks good! 01:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I can't expand Fading Echoes. He was only seen two or three times, and with minor roles. Anything else? 02:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really think he needs six quotes, not counting the main one. So can you maybe get rid of some? I would think 3 or 4 would be good for an article like his. 21:08, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I git rid of some. Other comments? 23:36, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. This will be CBVed once more votes end. 23:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 21:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:18, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Birchstar (WC) ~ Silver Nomination
My other votes are technically over, so I'm doing this one. He's a very minor character, and there's only one sentence about him at all, so I think it looks good. 02:11, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Since there's only one sentence about him, I guess there's nothing you can do to his article. 17:50, August 23, 2011 (UTC

It's on the list. 19:50, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 21:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:19, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing ~ Silver Nomination
Ok, I expanded a lot in Starlight, and I tried to expand also in Sunset, Sign of the Moon, and Dark River. I still need to do a lot in Dark River, but I honestly think I need help pointing out all of the times she was seen with Thornclaw. Anyways, comments? 22:19, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if you can nominate this because of the No Reservations rule. Only after an article is mostly fixed and the nominator has done all he or she could to the article is when the nomination takes place. You know you still need to do Dark River, but you're nominating it, which might not be right. I could be mistaken, though. Anyway, I'll try to help with expanding. 22:23, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry if I have, I'll go on right now and try to fix up Dark River so that I won't be breaking the rule either way... 22:44, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. I expanded Dark River. I think it looks a lot better now. 22:58, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think most of the history section can be expanded. Look at the Midnight section before and after I expanded it, and you'll see what I mean. 00:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

See here. The article is missing quite a few appearances, and it should be expanded. 00:17, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! Great job. I'm going to go and expand some more... any place in specific? 04:28, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm expanding as much as I can, though I do not have the books with me currently because I'm not home for a bit. I'll expand as much as I can, though, of course. 04:38, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I took care of everything up to Twilight, so after that the books need expanding. Of course, I am probably the queen of typos, so you might want to check the parts I expanded. :D 18:34, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Will do. 04:41, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Is this still being vvorked on? 02:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys. Is expanding all I need to do? 14:02, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Ivy! 19:54, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like it, nice job Ivy! 22:44, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 21:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:22, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnpelt - Silver Nomination
I've edited it to make it ready for silver. Comments? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:59, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The article needs a main quote. Expand Outcast, Eclipse, and the OM series. 00:11, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 19:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

In Dark River, it says the senior warriors are moved. You should explain why they are moved, because moved can have many meanings. 21:30, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:43, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I got a few grammatical mistakes, but I think that's all. 18:34, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 14:44, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the last paragraph of Eclipse. It could be more detailed. 23:45, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I have not expanded it yet, but I am still working on this. I'm having computer problems, which is why I haven't got on it. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 21:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Done. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:16, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once votes are over. 00:54, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 23:36, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 03:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Boulder ~ Silver Nomination
I really fixed up his history, and I truly believe he's ready. Comments? Shadewing

I would try to expand the Original Series except for The Darkest Hour. 17:51, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Will do. 00:01, August 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright. Fixed, although I couldn't a single piece of information on him in A Dangerous Path. 14:56, August 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing\

Looks good so far :D 23:32, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this Shadewing? 02:35, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, no one's said anything, so what should I work on? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:26, September 8, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Looks good, I'll add it to the CBV list momentarily. 22:40, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 23:37, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail ~ Silver Nomination
I am nominating Falmetail becasue he looks good enough to be silver! Comments?

~Brackenfur66~ 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66~Brackenfur66~ 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mean Flametail? His second quote doesn't show his personality; you might want to find a better one. also, expand Night whispers, and Fading echoes. 22:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Outcast, Sunrise, The Fourth Apprentice, and Sign of the Moon. I'm sure there's better quotes somewhere else. 23:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

No promblem. Just give me a week.

P.S. my siggie isn't ready yet sorry

~Brackenfur66~

Are you still working on this? 23:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yep still workin.

☺Brackenfur66☺ 02:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)Brackenfur66☺Brackenfur66☺ 02:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetbriar ~ Silver Nomination
I tried to expand as much history as possible. Comments? 07:04, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a quote of Bluekit mentioning her? (sorry, new here >.<) Mi  st  y!  07:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes add all the quotes that relate to her (I think there's two: the one mentioned above and the one where Pinestar is talking about his first battle.) Also, see if you can smooth out the first paragraph of BP. 10:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done everything. 06:37, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good! I would skim through Bluestar's Prophecy to make sure that you mentioned every time she was in the books. Also, Mistypebble; Don't be afraid to express your opinion. ;) 06:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The first paragraph of her article is very terse and choppy so I would make it flow better. 14:03, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Also fixed up some references. 06:41, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? 02:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

It probably is there just haven't been any critiques. Looks good, Robintalon. This will be CBVed when more votes close. 18:21, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay cool 05:14, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Waspwhisker ~ Silver Nomination
I've been working on his article for a while, and I added on to a bit of SkyClan's Destiny and The Rescue. Comments? Mi st  y!  07:28, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I know he only appears a few times, but is it possible to add more detail to both sections? Also, add some quotes. :) 02:39, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Added onto SkyClan's Destiny, but I couldn't find anything else in The Rescue.. I also added two quotes. (Is it okay for them to be on the same page?) Mi  st  y!  04:25, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? Mi st  y!  19:18, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another good quote? Also, the main quote doesn't tell much about his personality. Give it more background/detailed description. Say something like Waspwhisker after getting injured in battle, or whatever it was. 22:22, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get on that as soon as I can. ;) Mi  st  y!  00:21, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Finished, anything else? Mi st  y!  19:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks brilliant! You only need 3 quotes in the quote section, and it doesn't tell much about him, so I deleted it for you. This can be CBVed once votes end. :) 22:06, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! :3 Sorry 'bout that didn't know about the quote thing xD Mi  st  y!  03:10, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Its okay. This is on the CBV list. 00:04, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Mudpuddle - Silver Nomination
Yeah he's really minor, so there wasn't much that could be done. I gave him the only quote he has and expanded his history a little bit. Comments? 21:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think he can be expanded any more, so this can be CBVed once more votes are over. 22:41, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt ~ Silver Nomination
So, I added as much history as I could, searching up her name in the book, so I'm sure that's all she's mentioned. I also added all her quotes, and I'm sure the family is complete. 00:36, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Good job. I see nothing wrong, though you mind want to remove the trivia about her not being mentioned in the allegiances. In Bluestar's Prophecy, ThunderClan was the main Clan. The other Clans were like dust and beetles, WindClan didn't get all their cats mentioned, though I'm sure of it when they get their own super edition. 18:30, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, done. 23:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once a lot more votes end. 00:50, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
She's very minor. Comments? Swee tflo  wer   02:03, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Currently you have four nominations up when you're only allowed three. This will be closed until one of your nominations close. 03:01, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Where is my third? The Honeypaw (SC) ~ Bronze doesn't count. Does it? Besides you don't nominate them for bronze so where is my third? Swee tflo  wer   18:01, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oi, french has fried my brain. Anyways, sorry, miscounted. :P Can you expand the article anymore? Or add quotes? 00:48, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lawls, it's ok, it happens to me, except not with french, anyways, done ;)  Swee  tflo  wer   20:15, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

If there is any way that you can go into more elaborate detail about what Honeypaw has done, then go ahead, otherwise I don't know what else you could do. But since s/he is going to appear in two more books and we know little about the character, shouldn't we wait? 22:06, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add 2 more quotes? 22:18, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy Me either

@Misty I can't add anymore quotes, she has no more. Swee tflo  wer   23:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

While the series isn't complete, doesn't mean that this nomination has to wait. If the article's in that bad of condition long after the series has ended, we can always have a discussion about demoting it. Otherwise, looks good, Sweetflower! 23:53, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Atelda, and by the way, even if there are future books, it's just like Squirrelflight or Dovewing they'll appear in more books, even though they both (probably) have been nominated silver (or gold)! Swee tflo  wer   20:11, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nettlepad - Silver Nomination
Comments? 14:24, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have any more good quotes? If not, then it looks good. ;3 01:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. 17:15, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

On the list. 19:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Domino ~ Silver Nomination
I added quotes and expanded his article, so comments? :3 01:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Any more quotes? If not, don't fret. :) 22:37, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It says that Domino is Fleck's kin, I don't have the book handy so maybe if you can find a citation and add it in to his charcat, and you could just list him as "kin" since it could mean brother, father, nephew, ect. 22:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Its page 83-84. 23:27, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done, I even added another quote. Thanks Mistystar. :) 02:03, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't get mad, but I added the family page and citations and stuff, but I think I messed it up ;-; I looked at the coding and everything and it still isn't right. Oh well, if you know what you're doing then the stuff's there, just fix my mistake I guess xD I tried helping! 01:15, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm not at all mad. I fixed the coding and such in the Family section. ;) 18:21, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I put it on the list. :) 19:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Piper ~ Silver Nomination
She has the only quote relating to her, and I expanded the history. 23:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. She is very minor and only appears in Crookedstar's Promise so there's not really anything to add. 02:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I added the alive templates and the family tree. Thats it, I think. 00:29, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

On the list. 23:25, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rock (Healer) ~ Silver Nominaion
I see nothing wrong with him. He looks ready. Any suggestions? 00:01, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you expand Outcast some more? Other than, it looks great! ^^ 19:52, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

All expanded :) 21:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also expand or add more detail too Long Shadows. It seems very choppy and concise. 00:47, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

All set. Sorry about the late reply my cpu crashed and I am currently at the library. Anything for the Wiki :) 17:40, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find another quote? If not, supporting. 00:02, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Logfur ~ Silver Nomination
I shall add the quotes later. :P Besides that, his history looks great! Comments? 14:27, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Added the quotes in! Anything else? 21:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another quote? 00:30, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

There aren't any other quotes. I checked my copy of Code of the Clans and there aren't anymore quotes. 11:42, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then this will be CBVed once more votes end. Great work! 22:01, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteberry - Silver Nomination
A very minor character. Well, comments? 19:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whos's Whiteberry? xD jk. This looks great! 21:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add as the quote where he is sharing tongues at the gathering? And if any more sentences mention him, use them as his quotes. 02:15, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:57, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, but I remember in CP, Oakheart, I think, said that the elders (including him) were chatting away. In Chapter 20, I think, he is mentioned. Add that. 00:34, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try to find it. 19:22, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Erm.. I don't have CP.. Sorry xD 21:15, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you use harpercollins or something? I don't have it right now either. 22:44, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wow!
Hey, so happy to see this project running well. Most of you probably don't know me and I don't know you, but you all are making this Wikia a great place. Thank You. Whitestorm17 22:22, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

@Whitestorm17 You were the past PC leader, right? 22:26, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I sure was. :) I'm afraid I don't remember you though. :( It's awesome to see you putting up nominations though. Whitestorm17 23:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

XD Who your talking to is one of the newer generation editors, includeing me. I've heard of you, and I think of you as one of the wiki's legendary users 8D -- 23:26, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I joined in May 2011 xD 23:31, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Same; Fist Bump! B) Sorry if I have been inactive lately, school stinks DX -- 23:34, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Legendary users? Oh my, am I that important? :P There were a few others who were more "legendary" than me. I hope I did make a good legend however. :) Oh yes, I became unactive way before May this year. BlueOrca, are you apologizing to me? Don't apologize to me! You have been way more active than me! And a little activity is better than none! :) Whitestorm17 23:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whoa....Whitestorm? I thought you didn't check on WWiki anymore! O.o Last time I saw you, you were on Warriors Theory IRC! You probably don't remember me though. :P 10:32, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Whitestorm. :D If you ever want to re-join, you'd be greatly welcomed. :D 22:00, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I do remember you Rainwillow! :) And no, I don't normally check on the Wiki, but I missed this place, and thought I would stop by. ;)

Thanks Mistystar, but I don't think I would be active enough, but I do fully support the project. :) Whitestorm17 01:36, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I sort of remember you, although I never actually spoke to you. But I do know who you were. :D Shadewing  Blades of the Night  16:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Same Shadewing, I recognize your username, but I don't ever remember chatting with you. :) Whitestorm17 18:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Aha yes, shortly after I joined I was inactive, so I guess I wasn't around much when you were active. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 21:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadweing

I believe so. :)

Oh alright, you guys convinced me to re-join. :P 12:33, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome back Whitestorm! :3 Oh, and yay! You remembered me. :D 13:41, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Woo-hoo! The leads back :D 20:53, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. Thanks guys :) 22:20, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, welcome back Whitestorm. I've heard of you before but I only recently joined. You probally won't know me. 07:22, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't remember you, but that's fine. :) Are you enjoying the project? 21:43, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) ~ Silver Nomination
Okay, I expanded, added another paragraph, and added a quote. Comments? 22:34, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Add some more quotes. 22:52, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I can't. Thats the only quote that shows his personality. I just realized that I forgot the family tree, so I'm working on that. 22:53, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I went and added in the family list for you, but, I can't provide the references at the moment. You'll need to do that. 22:54, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I made a family tree and all the alive templates for them and completed it. 00:27, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh gawsh...
I can't believe I'm doing this, but I'm leaving the wiki. Sorry guys, the wiki has just lost my interest and I'm starting to get more busy and not feeling like coming on here. xP I'll still be around on the IRC, though, if you ever want to chat. :3 So good-bye everyone~ 01:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, Rainy! I'm sorry to hear you leave =( Good luck in life though! 04:56, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, I will miss you Rainy. Good luck with life. You will never be forgotten. 16:46, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I know I already said this, but good luck Rainy. It's sad to see you go. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 18:00, September 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing o Rainy. You're my friend, my deputy, and my apprentice. No one can take your place as a Wikian. Consider yourself one of a kind. Goodbye for now, and good luck with life.

I haven't chosen a deputy yet. I will announce my choice once I've made it. 21:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bye, Rainy! We'll all miss you. You've been a great and dedicated user to the wiki, and will be a great loss to all the projects. Good luck! 21:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Silverhawk - Silver Nomination
Considering he's such a minor character, I think his article has enough information to have a silver grade. 17:04, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps flesh out the beginning of Crookedstar's Promise some? It looks great, Icy :D 21:36, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also, add more quotes. In CP, he does say a few more good sentences that can be used. 22:26, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

CBV List
I created a CBV List to help the leads. I didn't add all the articles that should be on the list, so I'll need help from other leads. Please note: Only leads should be using this list. This should help manage the high traffic amount of nominations. 22:30, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanclaw ~ Silver Nomination
Well, there wasn't much to add, he isn't really a major character. I did check this time to make sure he wasn't already graded. :P Comments? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 21:09, September 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can Outcast or Sunset be expanded? This also needs a main quote and another quote for the quote section. 22:03, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Flesh out Eclipse. 22:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Will do, whenever I have time. :p Shadewing  Blades of the Night  02:14, September 13, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Okay, I added a bit to Eclipse, but there was nothing else on him. I checked the whole book. Nothing. Same goes for Sunset. I'll get around to Outcast and quotes as soon as possible. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:45, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright, expanded Outcast, added a main quote. I'll try to get some more quotes. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:27, September 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I added more quotes. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:18, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Wonderful! This will be CBVed once more votes end. 23:44, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Frostfur ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? Swee tflo  wer  00:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Bluestar's Prophecy, Rising Storm, Forest of Secrets, A Dangerous Path, and The Darkest Hour. Sorry if I sound picky. 10:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

See if you can find one or two more quotes for her. 19:46, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Done ;) I fleshed it out, she didn't appear in many, but I did expand Dawn xD  Swee  tflo  wer    23:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC) Can you find one more good quote? Characters should have at least 3 quotes in their quote sections.  00:01, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

There are four quotes there already?! Swee tflo  wer   20:46, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't see it; I thought there were 2. xD So, add descriptions for the quotes. 22:00, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lark ~ Silver Nomination
I'm still expanding the history and finding quotes. 11:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, if you find more quotes, a better main quote could be chosen. Besides that, I think it's fine.

There's a no reservation rule, right? xD Its okay, the page looks pretty complete. So, add a quote section, since I'm sure she has a lot of quotes in SotM. 22:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower - Silver Nomination
Aahhhh... the thrill of nominating again. :) I went through her article, and expanded history where I could, and found some good quotes. I will still look for some more, but for the time, being it looks fine. 23:12, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! If you can find more quotes, great, but if not, then thats good. Can the last sentence of Dawn be expanded? Does Morningflower say anything to show that she is satisfied? Sorry, but I don't have the book, so I can't check. 22:11, September 15, 2011 (UTC)