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Featherwhisker (Ki) ~ For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Dull and blur the highlights, please.-- 00:45, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:51, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing. 19:21, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

They're showing for me. I don't know what the problem is, if it's on your end or what... 17:27, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the light on <-- visible leg.

Re-uploaded 14:37, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded fixing shading 14:40, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Is it my screen, or is there a square on her chest? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

I'm trying to fix that. 15:46, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. gosh 15:53, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. WAAASTEEE also featherwhisker is a dood 15:56, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs? You're doing great! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:56, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i just want this to be approved tbh 16:20, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't worry you're getting there. Blur all the shading a bunch, and lighten it a shade or two on the right side > 20:10, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. mmm delicious shading 03:57, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading, that's all I can say about this lovely image right now ^^ you did a brilliant job. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:20, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Also, is the shading layer above the eyes? Because the eyes seem to have shading too. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:21, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, it is. Do you want me to fix that? 23:15, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:19, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading; it’s also leaking away from the lineart. Also, can you put the lineart above the rest? It’s supposed to be pure black. Other than that, this is so adorable! --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Im sorry, but i think this will most likely be declined soon due to the one month limit =(.-- 06:00, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Although you're right, please keep in mind, Breezeheart, that saying that is not your place. A project lead are the only users allowed to say that- just like asking if you're still working, CBA'ing, ect. Sorry, Gia, I don't have a choice.

Uploaded. Finding my own unique shading style..I think I finally found it. Well gonna use my dads laptop to do images while on vacation. Comments? 15:56, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can barely see it. it looks so much better than mine ; - ; 16:39, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

IDK why... But why do I think the base color seems very light compared to his other images? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:09, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

The base should be around the range of #BFBFBF. I somehow have one of his files (don't ask, I have a shitton of files lmao), and that's what the base shows for what I have. Also, smooth out the shading- it's rough in some places.

I color picked from the starclanner so the base should be accurate. And the shading is supposed to look like how it is^^ but I'll smudge it a tad more just because it does look a bit odd in some spaces. But I'm trying to find my own style so yeah.. I'll try to re-upload sometime later on. 18:08, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

You haven't uploaded since the 30th- are you still working?

Yes I am. So sorry, I caught the flu that same day I said I'd reupload and I just got better. I'll reupload within the hour or so. 13:27, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Had to redo the whole thing because my dads laptop is not available so had to redo it on my moms..eh don't mind too much though. 14:19, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source, at least on the face. 23:03, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think it's alright, many other users have shaded their kits' faces like that before and where it is brightest on his face is where the light is coming from while the rest is shaded. So I'd rather not touch it. If anyone else thinks it is unclear where the light is coming from though, by all means say something and I'll tweak it. 03:22, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

I actually agree with Gia- the entire face looks to be in shading and I can't tell where the source is at all. Getting real sick of this "I think it's alright thing" with PCA do I need to bring up another wall on the talk page because I'm gonna do it.

Re-uploaded. No need honestly, I was only asking for another opinion. And I have seen other images like it, so I just thought it was fine. No need to worry.. 14:13, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Do you mind smudging/blurring the earpink just a tad bit more? It looks a bit hard edged. If you think its fine, feel free to disregard this.

I agree with Breeze, please smudge/blue your earpink some more ^^ 23:13, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 06:23, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Dustpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
Ok, I don't know if chararts can be done in a day, but anyway, this is my first charart! I used PAINT.NET for this one. He's so cute! How can I improve? This is my first charart, so I may not be familiar with everything. BTW, how to make background color disapperar? I had trouble with that. Hope this helps! FireTail101 (talk) 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sign your posts with four tides plz. To remove the background, select the linear art, copy it, paste it onto ur base color layer, then use the magic wand tool and delete the background with control+x. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 23:58, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Plz match his other images by adding stripes as well. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups

The stripes are already there, just dark. U probably couldn't see them because of background. FireTail101 (talk) 00:13, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color and define the shading. Not bad for ur first charart! If You had seen my first charart, you'd laugh your head off. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:17, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Colour pick from one of the other Dustpelt images. Just be careful not to colour pick a shaded spot. Also with PAINT.NET, I leave the layers and save as a .pdn, then save again as a .png and that will make it one layer, making it easier to edit the waste. I leave the .pdn as multiple layers so I can edit it easier. This is great for first try! --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Stealthfire, I colourpicked each color from Dustpelt's apprentice image. FireTail101 (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I still think it's a bit dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

He's way to dark. He looks like a black cat on my screen, tbh. You can use  this to colorpick from; Because right now, he's so dark to the point i cant even see his stripes or lineart.

Use the medium brown on the bottom left as your base; while using the paler brown beside it for his pale parts. The pink is for his ears; and the orange/yellow in the middle is for his eyes. The darkest brown is for his stripes. Also, his nose needs to be black/dark brown to match his other images. 00:30, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups FireTail101 (talk) 02:08, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define/darken the stripes? I really can't see them. You're doing well! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Sure. FireTail101 (talk) 16:57, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base coat a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:23, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups - Darkened the stripes and lightened the base. Firetail 22:53, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Also, in terms of image approval, when do I become an apprentice? FireTail101 (talk) 01:27, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

When a senior warrior thinks you're ready, they will promote you. For now, thin out and add more stripes to match his other images. 06:16, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are a bit slanted compared to his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:05, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a bunch as its looking pretty neon. Try color picking from the starclanner. Also define the pale chest as its barely noticeable on this compared to his other images. You're doing a great job! 20:04, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

So fix the stripes, add more stripes, dim the earpink, and define the pale color. Ok, sure. Thanks for all the comments! FireTail101 (talk) 01:19, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? The image looks the same as before. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:04, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think Firetail re-uploaded yet, I think he/she was just confirming out loud what we all just commented. I'm on mobile though so I can't see recent changes at the moment. 21:46, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Ya I didn't reup yet, though I'm going on vacation tomorrow and I'll try to reup tonight. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:51, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

BTW changed my signature from old boring default, its different. I'm a he  Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:54, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups IN A RUSH Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 02:14, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you curve the tabby stripes so that they flow with the curve of the body? 1:24 Sat Dec 27

Could you thin out the stripes they seem thinner on the other images. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   14:10, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

I'm back now, so I'll be able to reup today or tomorrow. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 14:49, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Reups - Happy New Year! Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 22:06, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you give the stripes a bit more curviness? Lol that's not a word  04:09, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ya I though the same too, all I did was motion blur last time. I'll do that. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 16:13, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest you to not use motion blur, as it will most likely wreck the stripes. Maybe redraw them? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:43, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes a tad bit darker to match his other images, while your at it. 08:02, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'll just redraw the stripes and make them darker. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 17:07, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Also, when I draw the stripes, do I gaussian blur them? (I use paint.net) Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 17:10, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Eh, yolo. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 17:30, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want me to draw you up a redline for the stripes? I could make one whenever i can get to my computer; but you could either trace over them or reference it. Because right now, they still look too thick to match his other images. 21:48, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Sure! That would be great. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 22:00, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

If I am waiting for Breeze for 1 week >, does it get declined? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 21:38, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

There's nothing stopping you from continuing to work on this. You don't need a redline, and the only way to get better is to practice, practice, and practice again. Redlines should only really be used as a reference anyways- I know I don't like approving images if the stripes or something major were did by someone else.

Ah, im sorry for the wait, Firetail. I have yet to even get to my computer this week due to school occupying my time, so ive been stuck on mobile. Ill try to get on later today, if i can. ^^' 08:15, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Ya, I'll reup tomorrow. I can't do it now, I'm studying for exams next week gah... Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 23:58, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) - Declined
Yeah... I don't know.

Could you define the ear pink on this ==> ear? Nice job :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:17, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, it's the shading over it which is making it darker than <-- ear. 10:08 Wed Dec 24

I have to agree with my sis, I can barely see it. Maybe lighten the shading up over there or add some light? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:29, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Eh I can't see it too well, so just lighten the shading on that ear a shade or two. 21:42, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Lightened the shading on the --> ear.

Would you mind defining the shading a bit? It may just be my screen, so if that's the case, feel free to leave it. He's adorable <3 21:54, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think the shading is fine, but I'm not sure because it's hard to see on a black cat.

Black cat as he may be, I really can't see the shading at all unless I squint. Perhaps shift some highlights and shading around?

Still working?

I have to decline this due to lack of work- I'm sorry.

Tallpoppy (Star) ~ For Approval
Dun, dun. What a beauty! (I can't do stripes). — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:31, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

How did you do that O.O anyways, as for this beautiful image, could you define the light on ==> that leg? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:29, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:31, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded — Darken stripes and added some light to her right foreleg. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   19:35, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten your shading a bit, it's kind of clashing with the colors. 15:11, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, but the stripes are sharper on the other images so if I blur them like that they look even less like her other chararts. Thanks for the suggestion though. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:47, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'd rather just lighten up the face shading - because I fear that it will become too bright if I lighten up the body shading. I may tint the shading if that stops the colours clashing. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   15:14, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded — Lightened shading. Decide not to tint it. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   15:23, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Add more stripes and define them. 20:29 Wed Dec 31

Smooth out the shading on her face and (our left) shoulder. 21:56, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Can someone help me with smoothing out the lines? I cannot do it on GIMP. The stripe layer is here: http://oi58.tinypic.com/eq48t3.jpg. Thank you very much. I shall work on the shading now. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   01:52, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Won't blurring it at a rate of 2 help? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 13:00, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blurring would probably just make it worse if she's trying to smooth it out... I think she should probably unblur the stripes since they look like that on her other images. Jayie made the queen, so why not ask her how she stylized her stripes?

Okay thanks for that! I'll ask Jayie now. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   15:34, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest, I've been meaning to redo my Tallpoppy queen, because I made my stripes way more blurred and not swirly enough compared to her other images. And I think these stripes here could do with more sharpening, not blurring. But that's just my two cents. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:41, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Not if this will help at all, but this is the stripe layer I had when I tried the image: http://tinypic.com/r/ei9w6b/8 --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 16:52, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the paw shading a teeny tiny bit? 17:14, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is throwing off her color a bit in places... perhaps either lighten it or tint it? (Tinting isnt mandatory; so by no means do you have to do this) but it may help if you tinted it a dark red or brown; but black is fine if done right. Shes very pretty. :) 21:56, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smoothen out the stripes and make them blend? They look a little.. I dont know the word..not blended?? Oh! The stripes look really out and hard. (Just on the back though!) Hope you'll have a happy 2015! 21:50, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Sharp, Bramble? Also, Firrel, are you still working? 21:30, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

There's actually no date on the reservation table, and it's been well over a week since the last upload, so this needs to be declined.

I'll take over 15:06, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for taking over, think she was too much for me. stupid me forgot to put a date on   —  ☁ ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ  courage doesn't always roar!  23:53, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reups changes your welcome; I'm not impressed by my version, however. 22:51, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes more. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:13, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt Ro) - CBA
silver and black tabby aka I stole Dreamcatcher's coloring.

Define the shading a little bit? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:10, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps make the pupil bigger? It kind of gives off the appearance of being just horizontal. ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  09:11, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

This is what I usually do with my eyes, and the style is my choice, so I'd rather not change that. The white itself is one pixel, and then I use different colors for anywhere from three to six pixels, depending on what I feel like at the time. I defined the shading, though.

Smoothen out the stripes maybe? kind look rugged and shaky. (Or is it supposed to be like that?)

Can you define the leg shading a bit? I love the stripes. How did you make them? 04:01, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the shading because it bothered me. The rugged and shaky look for the stripes is supposed to be like two of my other silver tabbies, so I don't really want to smooth them out. I smudged them a bit more, but I'm not going to blur them or anything.

Eh, not to sound rude, but it looks like there's a square on his front because of the shading. He also looks a tad flat. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:01, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

I don't get what you mean???? Explain please?

Eh ignore the square thingy. I still think he looks a little flat. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:10, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Did you add any facial shading? If you did, could you define it just a bit? If not though, ignore this :) 07:55, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I defined the facial shading (or the head w/e), but I fail to see where he looks flat. Mind pointing it out, since I can't see it?

I'm going to take a guess and say that this is the square he is talking about. I outlined it. I don't know- that's the only square that I noticed. EDIT: I just use "he" to be used in general to someone whose gender I don't know. <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  16:27, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Please please respect the fact that I'm a girl -_- Also, it's mainly flat on the body, yes, the square was what Pinely is talking about, but I think it's fine now. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:47, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not gonna define the shading much more- overly defined shading on these looks disgusting. Or at least my shading looks disgusting.

I'm really sorry, it does kind of seem like he has a square on his flank now. Maybe thicken the shading instead of defining it? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:33, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'd rather not thicken the shading, honestly. and I still can't see the square- the shading's actually pretty smooth there without the stripe layer- are you sure you're not confusing the stripes and my shading?

Nah, it's fine, there is really no "square" ^^ I think my sis just knda got tired and can't see properly so she dozed off. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:07, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 00:59, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Tornear (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Happy New Years! I'm starting out the new year with this charart. ^-^ 19:19, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hmmm, think you could remove some of the shading/define the light on the top of the paws and on the far ear? 19:38, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Why not? 19:53, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add/define the earpink? I can't see it at all. Also, the highlight on the nearest forepaw could be dulled, and the shading on the forelegs blurred. Last thing, I see some waste below the forepaw. Overall, nice job! 22:59, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Holy crap I totally forgot the earpink. 23:11, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Darn I so wanted this Smooth out the shading on the tail and add more light? He looks purrty ^^ ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:08, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks~ 02:27, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere, it looks a bit hard edged. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:26, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blurred shading some 03:44, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and expand the light on the head. I'd think with the source, there would be a bit more shading on the head itself.

Does the facial shading look hard edged? 16:25, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, very hard edged. Blur everywhere to smooth it out some EosOfTheDawn (talk) 16:54, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

I blurred it to the max. 17:09, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you try lightening the face shading and blurring some more? It's still too sharp. EosOfTheDawn (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Boom shakalaka 20:15, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Could you defeintly the light source? The head tells me it's coming from above, while the haunch and the chest shading tells me it's coming from the bottom. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:44, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face a bit more, please. 07:51, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Redid the shading and changed the color a bit. 17:30, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out a bit more; it still looks a bit too hardedged(?) as it is now. This is really great, Tiger. ^^'

Thanks ^^ 18:01, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur it more? I suggest you to blur it with Guassian blur at a rate of fifteen and repeat until it looks nice with ctrl + F, then fix the light on the legs afterwards. ^^ Hope that helped. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:50, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Gaussian Blur has a really bad habit of making the shading recede. The blur took works just as well, if not better, honestly.

Think you could add some shading to the upper part of the tail, to make it look less flat? Shorthair tails suck so much 18:53, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on top of the head, too. 22:03, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Eh leaking could be fixed afterwards. That's what I do, i think it always turns out quite nice. But ignore me O.O if i sound dumb <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:39, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Still hard-edged? 02:16, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Eh yeah a bit. Smooth it out more? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:18, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldnt there be a bit of light on his hindpaws with this source? 12:56, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

-whistles- 02:14, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Add more light on the paws and blur it more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:54, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

I can't really blur it a lot or the light will be messed up

The shading still looks quite hard edged, blur it more? I dunno. =/ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:06, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks fine except for on the paws and I left it like that because if I blurred it it would mess up. 14:12, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Foxy- blur it a bit more, please.

While you're at it, the shading is Leaking on the front legs. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:38, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

I hope I don't have to blur it more. 17:49, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Jake (Lo) ~ For Approval
I like how this turned out ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:51, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes at the ends a little more; they look kinda cut off. This is nice! EosOfTheDawn (talk) 16:55, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Also I'm not sure but are you supposed to match the collar with the kittypet image's? 17:11, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Changed the shading to smudged shading. Collars don't need to match by the way. Also, if possible, may I keep his rouge image? If Skye would like it (since they are the OA of the Kittypet) they may have it ^^ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 04:00, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Shading's been bothering me, so I changed it back to blurred. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:00, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Theres waste by the tail. 07:46, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Why is the shading such a pain in the butt <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:57, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the head shading a little. I hate doing shading too :)--EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:46, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 10:58, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is throwing off the color a bit... perhaps try lightening it just a tad?

Re-ups I thought it was a bit dark there XD <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:05, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

No comments in four days, any more? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:01, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, if there is any. 13:12, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

There's no face shading. It's on the neck. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:13, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define/add collar shading- I can see any at all and I'm pretty sure there would be some, given his shoulders and all of that fun stuff on a cat.

Re-ups Eep why didn't some one comment earlier? XD Better? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:21, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

I really think there should be head/facial shading... I've seen loads of others use this source and still have shading there.

with this source I think the tail shading should be inverted. 02:37, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Like, drawn on the tail top, you mean? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:38, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mmhmm. The light should be on the underside of the tail, is what he's saying.

Re-ups Used Storm's loner image as a shading preference, and the tail shading was actually on the underside of the tail, but okay, I switched it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:01, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Ki) - For Approval
Not sure if I'm allowed to put this here since I'm not a member yet but here is my first charart. My sister Tigerbird showed me how to make chararts. 20:27, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Lower the shading on the chin, and define the shading on the tail, and maybe erase a bit of the shading on that back foot. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped How do you get promoted to an apprentice rank? 02:33, January 4, 2015 (UTC)  02:34, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

A senior warrior will promote you when they think you are ready. Blur the shading more? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 04:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

This is very good for your first! Could you add some shading to his legs? I see his paw shading; but if you did add leg shading, could you possibly define it? (As in, unblur/unsmudge it?) It may just be my screen; so if you think its fine, dont worry about it. 07:45, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and I'll go make you an apprentice now.

Re-uploaded Thank you everyone! Also, I smudge my shading. 16:27, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

You can still smooth it out even though it's smudged. Although that's nice to know for future references so we don't get into another screaming match over ways to shade. x.x Smooth it out a bit more?

Re-uploaded  02:32, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading under his chin just a tad. 12:54, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  02:25, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

It still looks hard edged over there. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:05, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  00:45, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out all of the shading just a little? It still looks a bit hard edged in places. Idk, if you think its fine, feel free to leave it. 02:23, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Breeze. While you're at it thicken the shading under his chin. Looking good :D <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 09:05, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) - For Approval
it feels like it's been forever since i've made a charart Brick   The Bite of '87  13:09, January 4, 2015 (UTC) Define the shading a bit more, please.

Yes; it's hard to see where the lighting is coming from. Also, try to define the earpink on <== that ear. ^^ <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  16:23, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lower the shading on the left side of the head? Nice job! Lucky I wanted this so bad Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:12, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading.

It looks like there's some waste near the ears on both sides, or I'm hallucinating. 22:50, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i62.tinypic.com/4uff2t.png Brick   The Bite of '87  14:19, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Jake (Ro) ~ For Approval
not sure why he's getting both a loner and a rogue cite, but I guess it must've been in the PC discussion. rainbow collar should totally be canon. 16:09, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! The pelt color is fine, but where did you get the rainbow collar cite? I thought it was purple. Also, maybe fix the pupil shading? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 16:59, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Nope to both. The collar color is artist's choice as we don't have any cite for it, so I'm making it rainbow. Jayce made it purple on the kittypet, and it's pink on the kit, and blue on the loner above. Eye style is also artist's choice. And even if it wasn't, 'fix' isn't specific enough for me to know what you want me to do. However, reup forgot the nick in his ear. 17:50, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah his twolegs could've gotten new collars for him over time too^^ you can match if you want, but it's not mandatory. Could you define the earpink just a bit? This is lovely Shinx^^ 17:56, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups 18:47, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit too thick, maybe lighten it up a litlle? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 22:06, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

(Since you said you put the nick in his ear in I'm assuming you did) Could you define the nick in his ear? I can't see it like, at all. 22:54, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups 23:26, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

NOOOOOOO I wanted this XD Honestly, the stripes are too smudged together, looking at his kittypet, you can see the stripes clearly and tell that they are smudged into the direction of fur. I honestly can't see any stripes at all so mind defining them? ^^ also, ifs he a dappled tabby? Because on his kittypet image he only has stripes. Lovely image! Betters than what I could do :D <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:26, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Stripes aren't smudged at all?? I did the same thing as I did with his kit image, it should match entirely. He's also got no dapples?? Just stripes?? 00:29, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Eh what I'm trying to say here... The stripes are a little bit too misplaced, they are scattered all around in circular forms. If you look at his kittypet his stripes are clearly lined along his back in an orderly line (eh I can't explain), and it does look like dapples but blame me because my eyes are so bad O.O ignore meh if you think it's fiine but I'm just expressing my opinion. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:32, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Also, could you smudge the shading more on the legs? It looks black and hard edged. sorry if that sounded rude! <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:47, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Ohhhhhhh... I get ya. 'reups Not making the striped perfectly straight though. IRL cats don't have such neat stripes, usually. 01:07, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smoothen out the outline of the back line of the shoulder? Looks too dark..Oh and have a happy   on January 6th! 1:51 January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Okie... I'm sorry. I still can't see the stripes. They need defining and right now they look like texture. And there really shouldn't be other stripes on him rather than the ones on his back and a few stripes on his haunch and legs. The stripes don't really have to be totally straight but right now my opinion is that this still doesn't match his Kittpet version. Sorry if I sound like I'm nagging your image. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:00, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

reups Lol you're not nagging, I appreciate the comments and you commenting on people's images actively is a good thing. But I have the file for both the KP and the kit, and this should match both now. And I'm not darkening/defining the stripes, I have the file for both images and it's on the same layer mode with the same opacity and the same color exactly. 02:53, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

You're gonna kill me for this Smudge the shading more on the legs, it looks hard edged. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:27, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. 14:17, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Burnt here; the leg shading does look a bit hard edged to me. Im really getting tired of all the "its fine" shit; Its happening way too often on alot of images, and its getting really annoying. =/ 11:23, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Breeze, please watch your language. Honestly, that was extremely uncalled for, and was quite rude. Dark can have whatever opinion she wants. If you wanna argue about it, take it to the discussion page. However, I do agree with the shading being a bit hard edged around the shoulder blades. <span style="">14:29 Sat Jan 10

It wasnt aimed just at Dark; it was aimed at alot of the members in PCA. Its really getting out of hand; and quite frankly, annoying. It shouldnt have to come to a debate every other critique, tbh. I wasnt intending to be rude, so im sorry you took it that way. I was simply trying to get my point across. 00:19, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

While you're at it, smudge the tail stripes more. They look very hard edged. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:57, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

finally reupped 14:49, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Gorsestar (K) - CBA
Gah, it's been way too long since I've done a charart. So busy. Anyway, here's Gorsekit. I had a lot of fun with this one, I think it turned out pretty well. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:47, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the shading? It's kind of looking like really dark stripes. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:51, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:56, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Think you could define the face shading a bit? 03:40, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Tweaked face shading, and the chest stripes to try and get them to match better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:03, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the shading looks like stripes. Perhaps tint the shading? You don't have to, just suggesting. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:26, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

It is tinted. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by it looking like stripes. Would you mind elaborating a little? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:35, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Well apparently to me the shading /looks/ the same color as the stripes, so I find it a bit hard to tell the shading and stripes apart. But if you say it's tinted I guess it's fine, blame my poor eyesight O.O <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:51, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the shading is tinted red, like his leader image, at least as well as I was able to figure without the original file. I'm not sure how to fix that similar to stripes issue. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:34, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe tint it even more red? XD Don't if it'll ruin the image, TBH I have little idea on how to tint stuff. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:02, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

No, the shading tint is fine as it is. Making it more red will clash with the colors. <span style="">14:30 Sat Jan 10

CBA?

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) - CBA
This was the challenge I was searching for! Dark coloured, long-furred tabby! Everything is from the kittypet image. I also looked at the apprentice and warrior image and noticed that there was some not really minor differences with the tabby stripes, like a stripe down the tail was on the kittypet, but not on the apprentice or warrior. Can someone check that? --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:55, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload forgot the SC part. --Stealthfire star (talk) 08:01, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, there's a stripe on the warrior's tail (I made it and the kittypet), but it's like really super thin. Also, as a note, the main image that should be matched is the warrior, as that was done first. They can be tweaked if it's that bad, but it's not important right now, so don't go nominating it (I'd want them anyways because I have the files). Also please don't upload another file- it's a waste of space and I can just rename it next time.

Could you define the ear pink? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:22, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Alright, I see. --Stealthfirestar (talk) 08:48, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Damnit i wanted this.. you beat me to it lmao. He looks great. =) 08:58, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload thankyou! :) --Stealthfire star (talk) 09:04, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the stripes and tail shading a bit? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:29, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sure. Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:39, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Frogtail (Ki) ~ For Evaluation
This is my first image, comments? Flameclaw1 (talk) 12:51, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink please. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

His nosepink needs to be black to match his other images. Also, define the shading just a tad. Damn, this is really good for your first! 13:08, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up his colour, its too dark a grey compared to his other images. 13:09, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Wow, how'd you do that? You can colour pick from the apprentice image, the unshaded part of the back paw is good.--Stealthfire star (talk) 20:23, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

The top of the earpink is a little too much on both ears. and can you smooth out the shading a bit. I also cant see the mouth so brighten up the neck maybe? Everything else is fine though. (3 days without any touch. Are you still there to make your Charart?)  14:31, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Eh to ask "still working" stuff is only for the leads. And it hasn't been four days yet so... <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:20, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (Ki) ~ For Approval
Wow it feels like a while......my first charart on a laptop, comments? <span style="">08:38 Fri Jan 9

Add a few more stripes, thicken them a tad, and lighten up the shading on <== side, I can't see the pattern through it. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:39, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ---> foreleg and lighten the overall shading a bit 11:26, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge and lighten the stripes. They look too dark to me. 17:24, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the stripes, maybe? They look really hard to me. 19:20, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Tallstar (Ro) ~ For Approval
He gets one, according to the PC discussion. Comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:40, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot- it's really dark.

This should be neamed File:Tallstar.rogue.png Rouge is a type of makeup. xD <span style="">18:31 Fri Jan 9

Re-named. I also think it has to do with the color red??? idk.

Yeah, rouge is red in french. Also, can you define your light source? I can't really see where the light is coming from too well. <span style="">19:09 Fri Jan 9

Can you try to make this match his other images more? Also, extend the tail, if you didn't already; he was named after his very long tail, so it would be in the charart. 21:01, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Redid it, as it wasn't cooperating LOL, I know you guys all want this image. I'd better watch out XD ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:53, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

The white doesn't really match his other images. Smudge the white with a smaller brush. Also, the white on the chest is still rather dark. <span style="">14:36 Sat Jan 10

Just to say, the white on the chest is dark because there's texture. Define the texture a bit more plz. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:36, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Shrink the white on his haunch, like I said before. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:52, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Comments would be appreciated. Comment away so I can improve this quickly. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:14, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Why are the white tufts of fur on his shoulder and hind leg so big? Its just a small piece of tuft on his deputy, loner and kittypet picture. Also another thing, why isn't th tufts of fur on his StarClan picture? Tweak maybe? (Sorry to make you feel offended D:) 21:03, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Because the StarClan image is facing a different side. I think the white spot on his shoulder needs to move <== way. The spot on his haunch can be left alone thou. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:18, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

While you're at it, sharpen the texture on his chest. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:21, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Comment away ppl :p! Better to point out the mistakes now than later. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:30, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Stoneteller (OTS) (Ki) ~ For Approval
*shoves stoneteller towards you* 12:32, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define/add more shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:36, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry, can you elaborate? Do you mean you want me to thicken the shading, or? 12:38, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah thicken it a bit^^ Exactly what I was trying to say <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:39, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Im just gonna redo the shading on the next upload. 13:29, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know where you color picked from, but that base is much too light. He's dark gray, so try #252525. Most of the bases on both the Healer and Cave Guard are plastered in mud, so you can't get an actual color. And the face on the cave-guard does have mud on it..but damn I need to redo that mud so badly lmao.

Re-uploaded. Yeah, I colorpicked from his healer. =P-- 13:44, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Screech (Ki)~ For Evaluation
I did so bad on him X( I just really want someone to help me on this. (So bad for my first Charart & I bet it'll get declined) 13:30, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

No it's good! Dull down the ear pink and blur it more. Also, theres a bit of waste near his left ear. You're doing great Bramble :) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:32, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading, while you're at it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:33, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Did you tweak the nose? Perhaps you should tweak it back. Look at my kits as examples, also it should say for evaluation. I do 99% kits anyway ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:35, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS accedently added .png a second time to my file, but Oh well!I think I'm doing pretty well. (how do I get it up for approval?)  14:14, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

When a senior warrior thinks that the image is good enough after improvements, theyll promote you to an apprentice and they'll change the heading. If an image is good enough, they'll approve it and add it to his article, for now, darken and define the shading, if there isn't any, add it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 14:43, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS made the chest a little bit brighter. Its going to look disgusting if I brighten it even more. 19:18, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest you for shading to use a darker color instead of adding light cause that would throw the color off. By the way, add some white to his eyes Plz. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 01:53, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS Add whites to the corners and darken the legs, tail, head, and the chest a bit. (Turns out, I actually like this! 02:16, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Great! ^^ Now I think you should add another layer, under the linear art layer and shade in the parts where light isn't coming from. Use a darker color than the base color. To see what I mean just read the tutorials. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:17, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS I hope you guys can see the differance... He looks so KAWII!^^ <3  20:57, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste on his head. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:17, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS These are going to be daily! So keep spammin' these suggestions! My little Screech ♪♪ AHHH!♪ 00:51, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Is his ear erased? If so, repair it ^^ and there is waste beside his legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:55, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named File:Screech.kit.png. <span style="">3:07 Mon Jan 12

His nose has to be black, he's a black cat. 05:34, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Here's lil' Honey :3 14:05, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest outward to the back? Also try to fix the ear pink. Its not the colour its the way it is set up. It looks rugged. (Sorry if you feel conflicted!) 20:55, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

She looks like a silver cat almost, lighten up the shading a bit. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:13, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Better? 20:01, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten her up a bit. She still looks a little grey. She should be as white as Cloudtail. 21:37, January 12, 2015 (UTC)