Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 271

Slightfoot (W) ~ Approved
his dash looks a bit odd compared to his other images? dunno just an observation i found while making it 15:57, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the dash should be more sharp? -- 16:07, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

the apprentice has texture, and has some very faint highlights too. (the txture is just the base colour but on multiply at like a slightly lower opacity than 100, and smudged slightly. the highlights are above the shading with just white blotches where the light would be the most prominent, blurred at a rate of 5 a few times, then the opacity is very very low. something like 5 or whatever looks the best.) 17:55, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure but the line seems to separate the chest and other leg or something? Don't know if the white should extend past that line

reuploaded 02:03, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Finely smudge the patch a bit? 19:43, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

better? 20:51, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Idk if I should comment on this since i've never made a charart before, but I feel like the smudge is a little bit too circular and maybe a little high up compared to his other images. Really good art though! Stormflash Diamond 00:35, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Anybody have a second opinion? 14:02, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

To me I think it looks fine, since looking by the apprentice it's a few inches from his jaw. -- 22:52, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:01, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:33, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Seedpelt (MV) (W) ~ Approved
16:00, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:03, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:33, September 23, 2019 (UTC)