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Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg

as a head's up, go ahead and start matching the pale blue-gray shade you see in the old one's prior revisions, we're swapping her and Mistystar to be pale due to a LS cite, per PC

'''Reuploaded! ''' Is this the right one? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  23:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add just a little more light to the muzzle, specifically on << side of the face, as its in more light?

With your source, I think the top part of your >tail wohld be in light as it has shading on too to bottom and that doesn't make since with the source so if you could fix that  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:45, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little light to the top of the paws 04:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There are also three pixels of waste between the hind paw and the front <--- paw. 22:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading depth to the haunch, it still comes off as flat-ish imo compared to the rest of the image

Still working?

14:32, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Yes sorry i just finished finals!! I'll upload asap -Shadow   hOnK :o)  04:21, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

There's three pixels of waste underneath the tail, and could you maybe define the earpink? 22:47, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch; there's a couple places where it's still pretty saturated 17:35, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  05:01, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

This needs a nicked ear. 21:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more.

can you define the eye depth? 02:15 Wed Jun 12

Dsfine the light source in the < ear  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more  Ellie  life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened the shading depth  21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg

Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat?

Reuploaded  16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.

Reuploaded  23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit.

14:38, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:48, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some light to the chest and legs, add some depth so it doesn't seem flat like it is on the legs and chest area  Ellie  life is an illusion 15:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll add light to the chest and shading depth, but Mink, this is the exact same way the legs are on the source I mentioned above, with the exception of the bounce light. 16:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did the things I mentoned. 16:06, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still looks flat, and should also be made to curve on the face instead of go in a line straight down. Also, same comment for the earpink color as on the kit

I get there shouldn't be light down there since I've used this source before, but it shouldn't look so flat as it is does. There should be depth. Adding some shading light should help add depth to the lighter parts of the shading there as well as some darker bits, like Blackstar has. The haunch is also leaking  Ellie  life is an illusion 17:51, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the light source to Bouncefire's.  20:42, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch could be swooped downward to encompass the curve (basically putting the shading on the lower haunch and connecting it), and removing some from the tail tip because there wouldn't be as much. 21:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:25, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, it should be on the bottom of the tail, iirc.  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:01, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire's source has the shading on top of the tail, not the bottom. 14:06, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire is a tabby, its not seen as prominent as this. As some others have probably said. One shading on another character might not work for another. The source contradicts the shading on the tail, it should be on the bottom as its inconsistent with it on the top. It doesn't make sense when the light is coming from > and the shading is where there should be light.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:55, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The shading can also be smoothed, too. 21:11, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploadeddddd again fixing a few things. 22:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

that bit thats still on the top should be curveddown as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded herpaderpderp  22:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

That's not what I meant, I'll give a redline inna minute. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

here, this is basically what im getting from you shading source so i did a redline. As well as fixing that, lighten and smooth your shading. It could use quite a bit of smoothing <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:25, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the tint to blue. I like this one better. 00:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Curve up the haunch shading so it shows off the shape of the thigh. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded rip I tried  01:07, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the line of shading going across the thigh. I think what Mink was referring to was curving the shading downward to encompass the bottom of the thigh. And smooth the shading, too. 01:10, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think the best way for the shading to go is to have a look at the updated shading chart, as it shows the two most common sources that users have been using for the warrior blanks + kits.

Reuploaded double rip, matched to tutorials. 02:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the over all shading a bit, then on the back line art the shading is very faint, define that? 15:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

That spot of shading still looks fairly light compared with the rest of the shading, making it look inconsistent. Could you make it match in depth more? I think the depth could be defined on both front legs and the face - perhaps expand it to go under the chin? Smooth it by the bend in the tail, it looks blotchy, and the haunch and shoulder shading could be smoothed some more as well. 23:45, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix the shading more tomorrow. 01:28, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the haunch shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:41, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:10, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the back and blur the transition more 23:12, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:19, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste by the back paws and >> ear; and I also think the shading should be smoothed.

Reuploaded tried using a pressured opacity smudge brush  20:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is a little bit blotchy at the top of the flank <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 09:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:37, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still very blotchy on the flank, shoulder, haunch and tail. 19:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded what even is that shoulder shading anymore. 20:14, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still appears to be blotchy in the areas Vec mentioned. Could you expand the shading more on the haunch and define it in the ears? 02:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:09, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch, shoulder, and flank some more as it is still very blotchy. 03:02, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, this is the last time I'm changing the source and the shading on this one. This source is A+. 03:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. Expand it on the back foot and the face. It also looks like it cuts off on the front leg closest to us, can you fix that? 16:51, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, I figured I'd note - please do try to make this the last time. This is the fifth time source's been overhauled via upload history, and each time it is, it negates all the comments before, extends the process, and is largely a waste of time for all the people who left comments beforehand. It's never really said, but it's never changed so much as to be an issue; I'm not alone in that we're all happy when it improves, and gets pretty close to done, and then poof.

Reuploaded Okay. 21:49, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the belly and tail shading. <span style="">22:57 Wed Jun 26

Reuploaded  00:27, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add shading to the lower section of the foot?

There would not be any shading there with my source. This was used on other images. 03:01, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

SkyClan's Destiny gray she-cat (W) ~ For Approval
My first canon charart. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 07:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading please? also there was a thumb on your image so i removed it :)

10:32, June 15, 2019 (UTC) whoops sorry for the double comment. the eyelashes should be removed as they are not in use to define gender anymore

10:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Soften up the texture a bit to match her kittypet. Good work! 13:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 13:46, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumb the image by going into source mode and removing the |left. Make the pupils less of a square, add eyeshine, and define the shading on the hind feet. 14:11, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Changed the heading from approval to evaluation since you're still a kit^^ Smooth the shading on the legs and flank, and there appears to be shading leaking from the chest and leg farthest from us, then add some to the ears. Nice job on this! 14:31, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes look like there's still lashes, that part shouldn't be there iirc <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:10, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 08:27, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the < front leg to remove the blotchiness, and you've got some waste outside the back

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:16, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, the back paw farthest from us would have some shading, though not completely in shadow. 20:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The eye color also seems different than the kittypet. Nice job doing the texture btw! 00:39, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 14:41, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and darken everywhere 23:34, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

There would be a little shading under the jaw with this source, and define the shading on the hind paw farthest from us. This may just be my screen, but there might be waste under the paws. 01:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 18:47, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

There is a lot of waste everywhere around her, so please remove that. Can you expand the face shading a bit to touch the eye and jaw, and a touch on the front leg closest to us? 22:05, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 09:25, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the front leg furthest to us :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:33, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking a tiny bit on the back. 15:21, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the face and shoulder a bit. Could you possibly expand the shading to go under the chin some? It looks rather flat around there and I think adding some shade will help. 02:06, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 08:21, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Bumped you up to apprentice, keep up the good work! Mind defining the shading on the < front leg?

reuploaded. Thank you, spookywilloww! <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 20:04, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on --> foreleg, and maybe add a little bit more to the shoulder just to round it out? Looks a little mishapen. 00:44, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 14:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (Ki) - For Approval
I think it's fine if I pick this back up? if its not lmk. I kind of stopped working bc i got sick and its hard for me to draw when I'm sick.. I still kind of am, but i'm feeling far better and so I created this demon. This time I got the original file for the kit. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste above the back <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:38, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups wasteus deletus <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up. Perhaps reupload again? 01:07, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

It's now showing up. 01:31, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add some more brown spots near the shoulder, just looking at the Hunter's side for reference.

Still working?

mhm im reupping when I get to the computer tonight <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:09, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

reups <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up again. Try reuploading once more? 02:01, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Ki) - For Approval
<span style="">16:34 Wed Jun 19

Can you define the shading overall, and smooth out the tail shading? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:45, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

In addition to Jose's comments, might you also expand the shading as well? I understand if that's just part of your source, though.

Still working?

Yes. I've been working overtime and have a final this week. oof. The shading is also purposely like this but I will try and smooth it. It's the same source I used on Shanty and Strikestone. <span style="">18:17 Tue Jun 25

Duskpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
oa claim from spooky

12:02, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

The colors look very different from the apprentice, and the stripes look more sharply jagged. 17:13, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

18:00, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

I think, to match the app, the haunch stripes could be a little thinner and more broken up as they go to the >> side of the cat

Would you like the file for the apprentice? 18:14, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

That would be great, blue! just send it to aritariusworks@gmail.com

14:27, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

It's sent. 00:56, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:30, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the haunch stripes a little bit^^

Reuploaded 17:33, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) - For Approval
Fluffy girl  22:10, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the overall shading, and define it on the ears and upper head?

Reuploaded  22:30, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 17:57, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:55, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading a little above the rectangle shading piece on the forleg so it connects to the shoulder/upper forearm shading some more? Seems very abrupt atm 21:18, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:48, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Very nice! I feel that the shading by the bend of the tail could be removed, so then you'd just have the patch of shading on the bottom, then one by the base. Not sure, it just looks off to me? Smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us, on the bottom of the tail, chest, and a bit on the haunch. 02:12, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:26, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading/smooth it out please 05:44, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:46, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

looking good, its nice to see how much you've improved in a short amount of time :) could you smooth the shading out a bit more on the chest, it looks prety hard edged there 02:39, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt! 23:27, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Evaluation
Haven't been here for a while! :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png) 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left.

Reuploaded~ :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears? 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:29, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Blend the texture in the shading more. Flip the shading on < this ear to the other side, to comply with your light source. Can you also smooth out the shading as well? To soften it up and make it more of a gradient. 02:38, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  04:15, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 15:37, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

This might be a repeat of the comment above, but maybe define the shading placement? Especially on the flank, upper shoulder and chest area. Right now it looks like it's all over the place atm. 00:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, tail, and front legs. The shading on the back also appears to be leaking, and the shading, over all, could be smoothed. 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Much better! Swap the shading on the bend of the tail to the top to comply with your source. 00:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded like this? :P <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:17, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Not quite, Crystal. Not only would the shading be on top of that bend, that whole bend of the tail area would be in shadow. Can you also define the eye depth more? 23:00, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now? :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste along the back, underneath the tail, and underneath the paws. Could you define the light (remove some of the shading) on the tail? Seems to be covered in just shading. 15:31, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:40, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Here is a redline of what you shading should look like on the tail. Red is where it all has to be in shadow, and orange is where the light needs to be definned. 00:51, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  ''<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:52, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Fuzzypelt (W) - CBA
Love this guy. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:36, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry to break the CBA, but, could you add some shading underneath some of the fluffy bits of fur so they don't appear so flat? (Similar to Brokenstar's leader and other fluffy cats)

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:52, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:32, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Ferretclaw (W) - CBA
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:36, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a bit? 21:19, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps desaturate the tint a touch as well? It's making parts of his gray look dark blue, to the point where it's distracting. 18:21, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Replaced it, still not too satisfied. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

It's still a bit sharp on the top part (our view) and bend of the tail - could you smooth it there?

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:52, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:32, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Eaglestorm (W) - For Approval
ugh, I tried my best. Thank you so much Eggheart for helping me with the texture. 16:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe add some shading and/or texture to the > front paw? 22:07, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add more shading to >>> this side of the tail, and some depth to the back paws? 22:08, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - The shading looks really dark here? 18:04, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Idk but this seems a shade darker than the old image - a combo of shading, base etc. might be doing it, I'm not sure

Re-uploaded The texture is way to harsh I'll re-upload soon with a smoother texture. 17:39, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Flaxpaw (K) - CBA
colorpicked from the apprentice

00:59, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Add a couple more stripes to the back leg in the space, to match a little more with the apprentice?

Reuploaded

23:49, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:33, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Grasspelt (W) - For Approval


00:59, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Add just a teeny bit of shading under her chin, and connect the back and shoulder shading (if that makes no sense let me know)

smooth the main body shading a smidge? <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 04:34, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps expand the shoulder shading so it meets with the rest on the back/neck? 14:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Really minor but his eyes look black to me. Would it be possible to lighten the main eye color a bit? 14:48, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Some leaking shading on the bottom of the tail. 15:50, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt. K) - For Approval
All colors from the original kit. Man, that stripe was fun. 02:37, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the stripe, add more depth to the shading, and extend the earpink 03:53, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the haunch shading a bit as well? 14:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:41, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink a bit more, and the shoulder and haunch shading. 02:37, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:52, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Shading in general could still be smoothed more^^

Reuploaded  00:35, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Brightspirit (K) - CBA
this is so bad lol 03:07, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

please dont comment on the waste. 03:10, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you extend the tail dorsal stripe all the way through to the tip of the tail? 15:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

reup changed other things too to make this look slightly better 03:08, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? There's still waste though, if you could clean that up

reup 03:38, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Skywatcher (W) - CBA
A true warrior. Comments? 14:15, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading underneath the ragged fur so it doesn't seem as flat?

I didn't add shading there because none of his other images have it. ^^ That would cause it to look different from the rest of the set. May I ask for a second opinion? 21:51, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

I always found shading on ragged fur an optional thing imo, and I think that should be left to artist's choice or maybe, as Hawkey said, to match a set. 02:57, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Hm yeah I'll concur with Vec. I do think the highlights on the back especially, but maybe a little on the tail too, could be dulled a little just because it makes the base appear lighter overall.

Reups. 20:52, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Featherpelt (W) - CBA
not a huge fan of this one but im done with tweaking it lol 16:52, June 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded tweaked face shading because it was bothering me 03:01, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the chest, including going upwards in the neck area, should be free of stripes? 03:04, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 04:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 15:26, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Flashnose (W) - For Approval
02:58, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

There are lighter stripes in tandem to the darker ones, and the stripes seem to be lighter overall on her old warrior. Would you like the file of the original warrior?

yeah sure if you dont mind LOL, i was going off her starclan sprite rather than the warrior  04:53, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded still had a bit of trouble matching but i tried matching the warrior more closely 22:36, June 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the eye depth or make them slightly darker? Malina457 (talk) 22:42, June 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

reuploaded 00:22, June 26, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Can you thin the tail dorsal stripe a little?

reuploaded 21:51, June 26, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Stemleaf (K) ~ CBA
17:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Foxheart (W) ~ CBA
17:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:33, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Snail Shell (W) - For Approval
<span style="">18:21 Tue Jun 25

For lack of better words, on the haunch, the gray spots seem to jump off the base a bit more, vs. on the other images/prior version they seem more muted in contrast

Morningflower (W) - For Approval
<span style="">18:21 Tue Jun 25

do you want the file? can you smooth out the black patches a little/cover them more with the lighter texture? 03:09, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Barkface (Ki) - CBA
This image made me respect the people who are able to make blanks about a thousand times more than I already did (which was a lot btw). All colors from the MC. 22:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you perhaps fill in that little spot between the tail and back leg with lineart? It looks a bit out-of-place. Also a personal preference, but can you round the elbow a bit more to make it less pointy? 23:03, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like this? 23:23, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Yep, that's good! 23:59, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Fringewhisker (Alt. Ki) - CBA
Colors from alt. apprentice. 22:57, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Flintfang (K) ~ CBA
zing

CBA?

Frogtail (W) - For Approval
yuh <span style="">03:16 Wed Jun 26

Define/thicken the shading on the haunch and front legs?

reuploaded also redid the eyes bc they were weird <span style="">18:43 Wed Jun 26

Add some shading to the hind leg closest to us? 03:06, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Slate (W) ~ For Approval
Still one of my favorites. All colors from other images. Comments? 03:43, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading in general, but, mainly on the chest? I can't make out much depth in that area

Reuploaded. 00:12, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you crop the image off the top a bit? 03:07, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:28, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Pouncestep (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors from other images. Comments? 03:43, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the eyelash Malina457 (talk) 06:33, June 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

The shading could use some depth^^

Reuploaded. 00:12, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (W) ~ For Approval


Add a touch of shading to the < ear?

Re-uploaded

Foxheart (K) ~ CBA


CBA?

Fox (Ki) ~ For Approval
gonna tweak it so the texture and shading aren't criss-crossing. 04:56, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:01, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Skyheart (W) - For Approval
eventually my life will calm down ( ...maybe  ). I'll get the waste by the tail in the morning... 07:32, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

There's more waste on the chest and < front leg :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:05, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

this is gorgeous!! could you smoothen the shading under the chin a lil bit? <span style="">18:44 Wed Jun 26

Re-uploaded 02:08, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Skyheart (K) - For Approval
will tweak the stripes on the app 07:32, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Dew (W) ~ For Approval
did someone say dew?

There's a block of waste by the tail. 15:02, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

(useless comment warning) DEWW?

re-up cue spooky :D

Darkstar (SkC) (W) ~ For Approval
old man 15:48, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Beetail (W) ~ For Approval
good enough for me 16:36, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (CP) (W) - For Approval
i love doing black cats and *clenches fist* not being able to see what im doing <span style="">19:07 Wed Jun 26

Ashfur (TC) (Alt W) - For Approval
trash cat

Fernstripe (W) ~ For Approval
Dont you love when you dont have to match stripe patterns because the one side never shows on the other chararts ^o^

23:06, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Going by the apprentice, the stripes look a little softer and lighter in colour?

Could you also define the pupils? 03:02, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you soften the shading?

Moonflower (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Colors from original image. Comments? 00:10, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a smidge? 03:13, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:29, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Firefern (W) - For Approval
00:15, June 27, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Brightheart (Warrior Alt) - For Approval
i couldnt download the old warrior due to the file corruption shenanigans but i did my best to match the colors (it should be the same? its literally just black and white ig) 04:05, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

dont comment on the waste, ill rmemove it in the next upload 04:06, June 27, 2019 (UTC)


 * Paleh said she wanted this and I was going to try and get next OA claim is she didn't. A month isn't up yet so i think this is still technically hers 04:07, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

oops, it was on the list so i just took it. wasnt aware of that, sorry 04:08, June 27, 2019 (UTC)