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Bluestar (D) - For Approval
Had trouble with the eyes, I'll redo them in the next upload, be nice if I did something wrong. --Gardenglaze 02:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

ear should be ripped. 02:30, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please reupload under File:Bluestar.deputy.png? Your original file has two .png's, so I renamed it, but please upload under this file name. 03:00, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure velvetmoon has already got this reserved. 03:20, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I should quit this and let velvetmoon take over? --Gardenglaze 04:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I apologise if this offends anyone. But I do have both Bluestar and Oakheart reserved. I will be posting the images soon. 15:05, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Upload thought I would just upload on this. 20:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading. 21:19, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe give it a little more depth towards the base of the tail? Some volume, so to speak? 22:49 Mon Jun 27

crop this to the lineart. 21:11, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make sure it consistently fills the area 04:13, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Got it to look better with smudged shading though I'm not 100% sure I like it. 12:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 12:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the butt please?  18:42 Wed Jun 29 

Reupload butt shading has been expanded! :) 10:21, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth out the head and tail shading a bit? 02:47 Fri Jul 1

Reupload 08:59, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more. 21:19, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smooth as I'm gonna get it! 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks really hard edged compared to all her other images. Are you sure you can't smooth it more, or maybe even lighten it? 01:43, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I thought shading was an artists choice. But I blurred it insted of smudged it so it matches. 05:54, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. Also, shading is artist's choice.

Reupload I smoothed it a lot more now I hate it but if smooth shading is what you want here you go! 09:45, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the image should be cropped... 16:16 Fri Jul 8

Um it is cropped. 17:41, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light a lil on the near back foot? Also, it might just be me but I think the shading's leaking from the lineart a bit on her tail.  21:36 Sat Jul 9 

Shade more along the bottom edge of the cheek, if that makes sense? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:28, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be cropped to the lineart. There's too much extra space on <-- side of the image.

Reupload I can't crop it anymore or else the tail Will be gone. My program only allows for even cropping on both sides. I don't see why I have to crop it when the lineart artist can't? 09:32, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and maybe expand it a little. 13:43, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 14:41, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Right now the shading is too hard edged, can you smooth it more? 20:55, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload  23:52, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. I'm not saying blur it, but look at the various other images that have smudged shading and see what they do.

Reupload 16:49, July 13, 2016 (UTC) I can't work out why I'm struggling so much! 16:49, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Did you accidentally hide the earpink layer under the base? I can't see the earpink... 17:41, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading; it looks very rough right now --  19:33, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. Unless when you smooth it out you plan on making it more of a gradient. And perhaps lighten it a tiny bit. Not much, just a few ticks. The shading is so solid and that might be why it looks flat. 19:47 Wed Jul 13

Reupload Played around with the shading but I'm not going to lighten it unless someone else says. 21:44, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be smoothed out more but I don't think it needs to be lightened. 00:59, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry but what do you mean by smooth it out? It's smudged shading and there is other images on this wiki with shading that needs smoothed out more than this. I can't smooth it out unless I make it blurred shading which I hate! Please can someone explain why it needs to be smoothed out and what that is meant to look like. 09:27, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

It's too hard-edged, clashes a fair bit with the rest of the image. As Sunjaw said, it should be more like a gradient. Look how it is on this, this, this, this, this, or this (David's are a good example because he's been doing it for ages). Many of these are smoother and have a gradient-like look. Your doesn't, and is hard-edged in places it shouldn't be. It does need to be smoothed out a lot- note how we're not saying to blur it. Nowhere were you ever told to do that. It's difficult to do smudged shading on a solid cat, so you'll need to find something on your own that works.

Reupload I give up! I just used blurred shading! I hate it but I guess that doesn't really matter. 13:24, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

Velvet, calm down. No one ever once told you that you needed to blur your shading, and you're making it sound like we're forcing you to do so, and you're overreacting and acting like we don't care. =/ You asked for examples and I gave you some, so there's no reason to act like we aren't listening to you. Smoothing it out can also be accomplished by just smudging it more. Say if you smudge something in an upwards direction; smudging it in a left to right motion can also smooth that out to make it less hard-edged. Using a size one brush to smudge will also help.

Hold up! I never said anything about being forced to use blurred shading. All I meant was it was the only way I could fix it. I have been smudging it more this whole time! It's not working for me so I just blurred it! I have funnily enough been doing everything you said and it just hasn't worked for me! I don't know if it's because I'm out of practice or what. But I'm not complaining I'm just done being told yo smooth it out more when I can't see what you mean. 18:41, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading slightly on the left-back leg?

Reupload 21:03, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

add some more shading to her back feet and lighten it some more. 22:24, July 18, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 10:53, July 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. It should be, since you're blurring it, a smooth gradient-like thing. This is a bit too hard-edged and ends abruptly.

Reupload I'm not creating a gradient never have never will. All my other images have the same shading if it's blurred. 22:15, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the <--  back paw?

Silvermask (D) ~ For Evaluation
Here's hoping this one gets approved ;) -- 21:01, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading? 1:06 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded --  01:27, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Could you tone down the earpink? It seems very neon atm. 01:41 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded -- 02:51 July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his face a little more noticeable? I know it's there, but I can barely see it. 07:57, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

should this guy even have an image? his page only says 'a dark tom', which could mean any colour. 09:40, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you lighten him. His previous image was grey and this looks black. 09:49, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Matching the previous image is not required. Also, I'm not sure if he should have the image either, tbh.

Because of his name, and the way his description is phrased, I think his stripe should be lighter than his base, personally. 15:41 Thu Jul 7

That's an assumption, though. It's fine being darker or lighter, and we don't make descriptions match what we think it could mean... it's fine as it is.

Re-Uploaded --  17:39, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink? Also on the topic of "should he even have an image", I think it's relevant to point out that Rubblepaw is also described as a dark tom and he doesn't get an image.  20:26 Thu Jul 7 

Re-Uploaded (Shouldn't discussions go on PCA talk page like the should Silvermask have an image?) --  20:34, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

He looks black to me, I can't see anything on this image bar the ear pink. Also, the ear pink is a bit neon.

Re-Uploaded --  16:19, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? --  18:12, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

There seems to be an un-filled white pixel on the right-ish side of his face

Re-Uploaded --  00:23, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add more eye depth? (Basically add a darker green on the edge)

Re-Uploaded --  18:47, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

I cannot tell what is shading (if there is any) and what is markings. If there is shading, define it and define your light source, as I can't distinguish one atm. 19:50 Wed Jul 13

On his page it says he's got a grey stripe but I don't see the stripe could you possibly add it or if its there define it. 20:36, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded (As for the stripe, it is there but it is black because the other images have it black. --  18:56, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

What other images? He doesn't have any other images, and since this is his only one, shouldn't it reflect his description and have a gray stripe? There's also waste along the back

Re-uploaded (I meant his previous deputy blank. The artist made it black?) --  20:46, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Since this is his only image, I'm pretty sure it needs to show the grey stripe. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 23:14, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Hi, OA of the previous image here. It was made using a dark gray (but a lighter dark gray, not more of a neutral) base, and a darker gray for the stripe. That wasn't black.

Re-uploaded --  20:40, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

The stripe could be blurred/smudged. Also, there appears to be waste above his back and at the base of his tail. 13:14, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --  17:20, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

There's still bits of waste on the back, and also I'm fairly sure a lump of lineart is missing at the base of the tail.

lighten/blur the shading 09:47, July 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded (Redid the shading) --  17:55, July 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading. are you using layers? 20:07, July 20, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the eye-depth?

Re-uploaded (Nope) --  22:52, July 20, 2016 (UTC)

There's a slight line of shading waste along the back

(Where? I don't see it) --  00:11, July 21, 2016 (UTC)

Um, was there even ever a conclusion to the discussion if Silvermask should have a charart or not? 01:32, July 21, 2016 (UTC)

The waste is definitely there -- floating in a line stretching along the length of the back.

You should probably be using layers so you arent editing the linear. its much easier. 06:27, July 21, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --  17:40, July 21, 2016 (UTC)

Mistfeather (Ki) - For Approval
01:31, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Does this have a blue tint? If not, it should. -- 20:48, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

tint doesn't have to match. :/ 20:58, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

I was previously working on this and I was told it had to match so....-- 21:52, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

why should it? as long as the texture itself matches thats all that matters? (and obviously doesn't throw off the colour a ton) 21:58, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Shading tint has never been a matching requirement. You were probably told about the base color and texture color, not the shading. The shading is fine, although maybe a tad bit thick... but I know Scar likes thicker shading, so I'm not gonna say to tweak that. =P


 * so do I fix something...? :P 22:04, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Not unless there's a valid reason for the tint to be changed. In this case, it's not really distorting the color that much; you can tell it matches.

Well fine, but I was told it was needed for this art and blue and black should be smudged for the shading so ... :/ -- 22:33, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

That is not what you were told. I just checked the archives, and they were talking about the texture, which is blue. Scarlet is not required to tint her shading, but I think... dear, would you like the file for the warrior? I think that might help out a bit here.


 * That's be much appreciated dear c: You still have my email? 05:32, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

I do not. If you could shoot that my way, that would be awesome. =D


 * Still not sure if I'm supposed to fix anything... Also gonna be away from my laptop until Thursday morning fyi 19:48, July 18, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded fiddled with the colors and texture from Cloudy's file 03:10, July 23, 2016 (UTC)

Stonetooth (BP) (D) ~ For Approval
I'll blur the stripes more in the next upload. Comments? 10:15 Sat Jul 16

Define the shading on the legs and tail. 13:15, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

He needs lil' teeth hanging out of his mouth like his other images

his stripes seem to be smudged a little on the other images. 13:59, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for stripes and shading. Spooky, the tooth is there, but it is very hard to see since there isn't much space for teeth because of where the mouth is placed. Unless I should to change the mouth to make way for the teeth. 18:34 Sat Jul 16

You need to outline the tooth in black since it's a lineart change. That why nobody can see it. 15:29, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:14 Sun Jul 17

Define the overall shading. 15:59, July 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">20:43 Tue Jul 19

Smudge the stripes to give them more of a furry effect; the style doesn't quite match as it is now. Placement is fine, though- it's just the smudging. =P

Re-uploaded <span style="">07:49 Wed Jul 20

Define the shading on the foreleg farthest from us. I think there should be some shading there, but I can't see any. Also, define the light on the back paw closest to us. 13:39, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">16:04 Fri Jul 22

Crowfrost (D) ~ For Approval
Comments? <span style="">13:52 Sun Jul 17

Blur the white, and lighten the shading on the white, as it's looking gray. 14:41, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink too 17:53, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the meeting places of the black and white --  18:59, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Also lighten the "white" markings to look white. Right now their a grey-cream color from what it looks like to me. Also smudge the white markings a lot as well as the ear pink. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 20:10, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:09 Sun Jul 17

Define the shading, and smooth it on the back paw closest to us. 16:00, July 19, 2016 (UTC)

Could you specifically define it on the back paw nearest from us as well? <span style="">18:58 Tue Jul 19

Re-uploaded <span style="">20:43 Tue Jul 19

Leopardstar (D. Alt2) ~ For Approval
lets not forget about it this time k shinxy  <span style="">22:19 Mon Jul 18 

Define shading. --  22:23, July 18, 2016 (UTC)

reups  <span style="">22:12 Fri Jul 22 

Marshscar (D) ~ CBA
 <span style="">00:45 Tue Jul 19 

CBA? 13:43, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

Spider Paw (ES Alt) - CBA
I'll tweak the eyes later; don't comment on them needing more depth, as I am already aware of it and will fix it when I'm more awake.

Re-uploaded. Eyes and some shading tweaks.

CBA? 13:43, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt.D) ~ For Approval
Wow been a while. Anyways, I tried my best to match the alt leader.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:06, July 20, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload noticed the blotchy shading on the belly.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:20, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

Mallowtail (Ki) ~ For Approval
07:10, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

Shellheart (D) ~ For Approval
first deputy and first patched kitten. well I'll fix the shading 08:45, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

re-uploaded better. 08:47, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading? Pretty kitty.

re-up why thank you good sir 21:20, July 22, 2016 (UTC)

I wanna pet it. But are you using the current version of the blank..?  <span style="">22:09 Fri Jul 22