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Patchkit (MV) - CBA
B) 00:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? He's so adorable :3 00:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. too bad he's dead lel 00:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded again and chnged a few things i didnt like 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Nettlepaw (MV) (A) ~ For Approval
These edit conflicts burn. I saw the waste, I'll fix it next upload. 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome. :D I love those pale rings on the tail. Could you lighten the shading on the chin and the throat a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Damn I wanted this lol. Mind smoothing out the shading on the legs? 00:30, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Spoiler alert! :) He looks a bit gold rather than ginger, can you make him a tad more ginger? I could be wrong but the tabby stripes seem golden. Gorgeous! 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorry Stealth, but I colorpicked off of a photo of a real life ginger cat (This one). It's just my shading that makes it look golden :/ I dulled the highlights slightly, though, so maybe that'll fix the problem? 10:33, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad bit on the face/muzzle, it looks more like a marking than shading. That might just be me, though. 01:38 March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink more pinky? It looks more white right now than pink. This is gorgeous, wonderful job Shinxy! 20:23, March 25, 2015 (UTC)\

the earpink is fine actually, though I do agree facial shading can be lightened. 21:30, 03/26/2015

Sorry it took so long woooah whats with the colored highlights in the editor?? 22:20, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitfur (E) - CBA
Bunfur confirmed. 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the tabby stripes lighter? They just seem too dark to me. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

i think they're fine unless others disagree - i think it's artist choice on stripe darkness? 10:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

stripes are fine, a shae was never specified. anyway lighten up the area where his tail meets his back just a little. 14:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 21:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading juuuust a tad. Not much, but kinda like what you did for Mousefang's kit.

re-up 18:38, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA for the ever-so-lovely Beebs?

Ravenwing (MC) ~ For Approval
I'll probably redo the earpink later 00:10, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! There's waste near the herbs. Also mind lightening him up just a little bit so that the shading can be a bit more visible? 00:29, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

He's black, not dark gray. Please do not lighten him anymore. He'll just be tweaked later to be darker. I actually think darkening the shading and perhaps playing with your shading and highlight layers might solve the problem.

Define the ear pink? 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I just read the book poor him. Make the eyes a tad darker please. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes are actually fine. 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

lel he deserved it, anyway add some shading or something to the herbs so they dont look flat. 14:46, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I pretty much redid most of this because I lost the layered file. 1:11 25 Mar. 2015 (UTC)

This should say "For Evaulation" since you are a kit, but no need to change it. I'll promote you since you know what you are doing. 02:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more, please. 06:17, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''  19:37, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you please lighten him up very slightly, I can't see any of the lineart. 06:55, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope this isn't too gray now. 19:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

lighten him a tiny bit more, still can't see any lineart 21:31, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. I'm not lightening it anymore after this. 23:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. 00:14, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstar (L) - For Approval
So happy I finally got my first leader image. :D I'm really happy with how he turned out - I tried to make him look like a burmese cat, but I think the darker face kind of got lost in the shading. Ah well. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:16, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink :3 So much like an oak tree, so beautiful(like I said in the chat) 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I see the earpink fine, tbh 02:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very well done! Can you define the legs shading? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading too, please. ^^

Along with define it, could you blur the tail shading a little bit? I can see it, but it looks hard-edged. 15:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the muzzle shading a bit? It almost looks like he has a rope tied around it xD like a muzzle. Lovely image, I love the way you did the texture. =) 06:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his base color just a tad if he's dark brown. Smudge the tail shade just a bit more. 04:57, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

tail shading is fine tbh 21:32, 03/26/2015

Birchface (W) - For Approval
Welp.

he looks a little green to me, maybe make him a bit more orange or something idk 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a tad more brown, like one tick or two. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love this image so much.

Define the shading on the paws farthest from us, if there is any. 00:03, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

It might just be my terrible eyesight, but maybe define the light a touch more on the tail. He's sexy c: 02:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

define the shading a bit pretty much everywhere, i can't see it. this is lovely tho Jayce .o. 21:33, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. Meh.

Bloomheart (W) ~ For Approval
Well, I tried. This is my first in a while, sorry for the cruddiness. For the eyes, I didn't know what color they were so I went based off a really cool chart which I will link. They're hazel, like a greenish for Blooms? Flowers? Pink ears also based off what the same chart said was normal. 00:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. :) Add shading to the right side of the front leg. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Also, would you mind lightening the shading a tad? Correct me if I'm wrong 01:09, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Done so. Looks a bit better, did the MLP style of shading the back legs-  01:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the ear pink a bit bigger.

It would suck if you guys made me edit it so much and then regect it, but it's good practice  01:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye color 05:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. Remember, defining doesn't always mean darkening but it means making it less blurred. 07:53, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look too blurred, can you make them less blurred? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Pixlr crap and won't sharpen, if needed I will redraw those stripes //shot  11:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Redrew stripes, will fix them soon-  14:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the frontmost back leg. Please stop aligning your images.

Sorry, it looks really weird. I have to align it, it's the option? Now it's going > way, and really weird. Someone fix that please? Maybe a mod? Wow, this image is getting a lot of edits... Knowing my luck, within a week bam it'll be moved to declined. 18:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just remove the |thumb on the end. Anyway, the stripes are very blotchy, do you think you could thin them out and sharpen them a bit? And perhaps add more after that, since they're be thinner?

Reupload Redrew stripes. Right now I'm just waiting for it to be declined. 23:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay first, please stop saying that your image will be declined. You don't know this, and it could very well be approved like every other image on the approval page. It really seems like your trying to guilt trip us, honestly. Saying things like that will /not/ get your image approved faster. This image is very well done, so i see no reason why it shouldnt be approved at some point. As for the image, define the tail and foreleg shading please. 23:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Sorry, I didn't mean too... well, maybe I did, I'm a bit confused right now and I'll stop. Also, fixed the shading. I don't mean to guilt trip you guys, I'm...Not really good at control that stuff? I'll stop, promise. Fixed shading as well. 00:05, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink a bit more and smudge it a tad more. And like Breeze said, it is a wonderful image. I see nothing that'll make you think this will get declined. =) 06:13, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Just bumping OuO  12:25, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 20:41, 03/25/2015

Sorry, Fern... I can't really do that with pixlr. OnO; -- 23:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The whole thing looks overblurred. Also tone down the ear-pink a bit and erase the waste around the head 02:35, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Tried to use the sharpen tool, I will redraw the stripes or upload the backup w/o pixel effect??? Let me know if it needs to come to the whole redraw thing 11:36, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

i'd suggest redoing the stripes and blurring them less then. 21:35, 03/26/2015

Darkstar (MV) (L) - For Approval
shading black cats more like nope 00:56, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Please define the shading. 07:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

the shading is leaking about the haunch, and perhaps blur it a bit more. Define the light on the tail and front leg to our right 20:39, 03/25/2015

Frecklewish (TC) (W) - CBA
- she might fall more into the mottled category than speckled... but I think she looks cool 01:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead and... Define the light on the legs? 02:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be cloudy and blind, I would think. 11:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, that would probably be an alt- Longtail had the same thing happen and since it happened later, it would probably be better to have an alternate image of it once this gets approved. Percy is also the same way.

yeah i forgot about that whoops. maybe dull the earpink a ittle and define the haunch shading. 01:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? This is lovely. .o.

Reedshine (MV) (W) ~ For Approval
-cough- bae -cough- 02:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. 07:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main part of the body.

Can you make her darker please? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named File:Reedshine (MV).warrior.png, (I've renamed it for you, but keep this in mind for the future) as there's more than one Reedshine and we have no proof whatsoever that they're anywhere near the same cat.

Sorry, I forgot there were 2 Reedshines. 23:21, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make her a bit darker? Given that she's dark orange and all.

Blur the ear pink near the tip touching the fur? 12:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

^^maybe like a burnt orange. Also I don't know if it's just my eyes but it appears the tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. Wonderful job! 20:18, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up 00:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Put a bit of shading under the chin and blur the shading around the head. Also, smudge the bottom of the ear-pink a touch more 02:36, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

I hate to say this, but now that Reedshine is confirmed to be the same cat as the other one, is this image necessary? ;,; 13:04, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

it wasn't confirmed that they were the same so this image still stays,  anyways define th shading 21:26, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the cite is for the cats mentioned around the time of SkyClan's exile, which are the ones listed in Firestar's Quest. There's nothing about Reedshine anywhere near that.

So sorry, Tiger ;.; Anyway, mind smoothing out the shading just a bit? This is a gorgeous image. 00:12, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped. 03:01, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Swiftflight (W) -CBA
Okay? Okay. 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC

Define the ear pink and lighten the shading just a few ticks.

Re-upped I was just doing that lol. Much, much happier 08:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit more? Nice. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 10:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

define the tail shading. 14:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The leg shading too^^ all 4. 06:08, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 07:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Beetail (D) ~ For Approval
DD 04:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

he looks ginger, can you make him a bit less orange? 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Much happier now. 07:48, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes a tad? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought it looked fine but whatever 10:19, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs a little? 10:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

What color are your pale parts? They look...kinda pink. Nevermind, that's my laptop- it's horribly miscalibrated right now.

Re-uploaded 12:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts do look kind of pink to me on my laptop, which is more reliable than my phone for colors and what I trust. Would you mind changing it a tad? 11:39 Wed Mar 25

Define shading a tad?--Russettail13 (talk) 22:38, March 26, 2015 (UTC)Russett

Re-uploaded 11:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the pale parts do actually look a bit pink 20:42, 03/25/2015

Define a d smudge the ear-pink a touch 02:37, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Completely redid the base color. 07:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Splashfoot (W) ~ For Evaluation
My first charart, comments? Also, could someone tell me why this is coming out really small so I can fix it? 21:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Well firstly what program are you using, Icebreeze? 22:32, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

GIMP. 23:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, so maybe you're not making it full size. To do it, click on the blank on the charart page and click full size. Also, are you using layers? If not, make a layer and put the colors and add another layer for shading. Okay, so can you define the shading, please? 23:25, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for all the help, Tiger! Your suggestion about making it full size was very helpful, and I think I have a correctly sized blank now. Yes, I'm using layers, and I have defined my shading on my charart. I will re-upload tomorrow. Thanks again! =) 01:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The image needs to be bigger. It isn't the right size as the others. 03:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Anyways, why is the eye sort of... deformed? 08:35, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

It'll probably be fixed when they use the right size blank as they mentioned earlier. 11:37 Wed Mar 25

Re-upped Okay, at least the charart is the right size now 20:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The linear art was weird in some spots, tell me if you notice any more. 20:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the lineart is still blurred. File:Warriorlongm.gif <-- Save that file, clear the white parts, remove your current lineart layer, then paste this in as a new layer. If you don't understand what I'm saying, I can show you. Alternatively, you could just redo this completely with the file i linked you. 20:45, 03/25/2015

Add a little bit of light on the front leg. It looks like something out-of-sight is blovking it. Spottehwobble!

Re-upped I completely redid the image. I will add some more light on my next reupload, I didn't see your comment until it was too late, Spotteh 23:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading a little less blotchy, define the ear pink, and maybe use this as a reference for shading? 00:07, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the earpink on the back ear and there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. 01:23, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the edges of the shading on the hanch. 13:31, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ok, I redid the shading 21:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out some, and there's some waste around the image. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

remove the shading from the tip of the tail, and the shading is leaking at the bottom of the tail. put shading all up the backside of the tail 21:38, 03/26/2015

Re-upped 21:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the back,legs and end of the tail. Good job! 😃 -- 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the back, back legs, and on the part under the base of his tail 22:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Sun! =) 00:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Deerdapple (W) ~ For Approval
Sweet 22:12, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Can you lighten the base color a bit, please? 22:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more 01:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define head shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 01:52, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Define the shape of the ear pink. I can kinda see it, but at the same time, I can't.

define the shading everywhere a tad 11:36 Wed Mar 25

Reups thanks, Tiger~ 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's silver, lighten up the base color just a little more. 00:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Thrushtalon (W) ~ For Aproval
I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-; 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me. 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups The shading looks wwwwaaaaayyyyyyyy better, /not  19:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the shading some 20:46, 03/25/2015

re-up 21:10, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the stripes on the haunch on under his neck/chest; he's starting to toe the line of triangle tabby. Also, blur and lighten the shading on the back 21:11, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could lower the shading's opacity as well, because I can't see the stripes at all through it. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Spiketail (D) For Evaluation
Welp... first charart. Hopefully I don't chicken out or get arrogant and I didn't screw anything up /)-(\  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:45, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the pupils/eye color? I can't see any at all, and he needs to have them. Also, darken his base just a bit, and blur the main body shading a tad.

blur the shading a lot, and make the light on the bent leg more visible <span style="">11:35 Wed Mar 25

There is waste under at the outside of his chest. Pretty goood for your first one! 19:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed eye colour, redid with a darker grey. Eye colour was originally supposed to be grey until my lesson learned: Never put grey eyes on a grey cat. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Realized I messed up on shading. I'll start work on it tomorrow when I wake up or after I get home from the hospital. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:41, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Eeltail (MV) (Warrior) - For Approval
Lil' Tabby 17:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a tad? Russettail13 (talk) 18:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Add a touch more light to the fronts of the forelegs and top of the tail 21:12, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:51, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it looks a little grayish and it's hard to see. 21:17, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval
My first medicine cat, and I love his name. ^.^ Comments? 19:09, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the texture more? Beautiful! And can you define the shading everywhere? Im having a hard time seeing it. 19:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks =) but if ya don't mind I'm gonna ask for a second opinion on the texture, just because I really like the way it turned out, but if someone else agrees I'll smudge it a bit more. I did define the shading, however. 20:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

just lower the opacity a bit more, the way you smudged it is fine <span style="">20:47, 03/25/2015

Sorry, but you're going to need to match this image, as we have confirmation that the cats listed in the allegiances of Firestar's Quest are the same cats in Mapleshade's Vengeance. This means removing the texture- I apologize.

Re-uploaded. Ah I see. And you're fine, who would've known other than the author herself? But I must say I'm a tad confused. Does that mean instead of^^ this Sloefur being male does he have to be a female? And also have long fur to match the other one? And have the same file name as the original since they're exactly the same cat? 22:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, everything needs to match- from the gender down to the pelt length. Sorry, that's just how we work- If Vicky says they're the same, then we don't have a choice. Gender can easily be changed later with the lineart, so that's no big deal. It just needs to match.

Re-uploaded. k he's now a she, and long-furred. 22:15, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit, please.

Myler (KP) ~ For Approval
???? <span style="">0:55 Thu Mar 26

Define the tail shading just a bit and I am going to steal that collar and run with it goodbye.

Re-uploaded. Pff... fine. ;D <span style="">1:29 Thu Mar 26

Smudge the shading more on the legs. 04:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Anywhere in particular? <span style="">20:46 Thu Mar 26

His front leg mainly, just a bit. This is gorgeous. 00:09, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (K) ~ For Approval
Hiya. 04:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make him more brown? 04:56, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading- I can barely tell it's there.

Midgepelt (W)~ For Approval
Sorry for not posting sooner I just got a new lap top and had to redo some stuffs. Anywho, here's Midgey. 11:49, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

he needs patches in his fur. 11:50, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the eyes...? All I see is the default area- did you forget to give him pupils and such?

Reups Oh my xD how could I miss the eyes if all things? 12:30, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There are still no pupils, also define the tail shading 13:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I reupped the wrong one lel. I added the defined shading though (this time I chose the right one xD) 14:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

where's yer light source? the haunch says one way, the chest says the other <span style="">21:40, 03/26/2015

Define the light on the legs, please, as well as the shading on the head. 22:46, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (W) ~ For Approval
My first warrior. For the chest, I tried to go for a soft look (feather soft!) 02:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the feather softness was in reference to the fur's feel and not necessarily the color. Thicken the shading on the back and define it on the head, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. 02:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I know, I thought just the lighter chest is fitting, and tried to make it look soft. 02:55, March 27, 2015 (UTC)