Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 83

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ Approved
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. 07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 00:22, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And smooth the shading too. It is blotchy in some places. 05:47, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Make the color match the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and tone down the highlights if you use them. Breeze whisker  21:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Starforce? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If Starforce isn't, may I work on this? 01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, not yet. It hasn't been a week. They get a full seven days. 02:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading. -- 00:11, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Starforce gave me permission to do this. I'll reupload ASAP 14:05, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink fail :P 01:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" tons, it needs to be lighter, and seriously smudge the earpink down. :3 03:28, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There's no highlights' to define. Add highlights to the face and front haunch. F i r e s t a r ! Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:30, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image so it matches the MC better, darken the shading, add shading to the herbs, and take the earpink color from the MC. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:40, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the eyes match the MC image... they look red. 01:32, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

A big chunk of the earpink is missing so fix that, and define/darken the shading. May just be me, but can you make the herbs different colors or is that unneeded? a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 02:43, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did I hated it so I just re-did it. 03:03, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and lighten the color of the eyes. 16:51, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

In his description it says he has long, feathery whiskers. I think his whiskers should be longer and he should get an extra whisker but I'm not sure. 18:34, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and add some depth to the eyes. I agree with Mountainheart on the whiskers thing :3 21:41 Wed Dec 21

Reuploaded I didn't add an extra whisker, I just made it longer like the MC image. 02:09, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged/blurred part of the ear closest to us. It also looks really dark, but if it's the same color picked off his MC image, then don't change it  04:19, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add the shading to the back leg farthest from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:34, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I just earsed all around the ear just to be sure and I took the ear pink from the other image. 00:37, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 01:08, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes aren't showing. 02:27, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, lighten the earpink to match the MC, and make the eyes more yellow-orange (amber) and less plain orange. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:55, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the eye color from the MC 17:23, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:44, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Reuploaded 20:56, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Make the eyes less red. Moonstorm88 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the MC. 22:47, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You took it from the wrong part. That's the shaded part of the eye. Take it from the middle color, not the darkest or lightest one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:13, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste on the outside of the front paw to the cat's right. 00:11, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Reuploaded Okay I killed teh waste! >:D 16:46, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, lighten the eyes and take the earpink from the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:14, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I took the ear pink and the eye color from the MC. I hope it looks better. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  18:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Blur the shading more and make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also blur the highlights if there are any. 22:56, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  17:42, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear, make the shading more consistent, and define your light source. 10:50 Fri Dec 30

Define the highlights and perhaps lighten up the ear pink, or make it more red. The ear pink looks a bit brown to me. 18:33, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I dont use highlights, Dapple. And I re-did it becuase the shading was bugging me. Comments? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudged earpink. <span style="">00:01, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Reuploaded  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  02:10, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bum and smudge the earpink into the ear more so it looks like fur sticking into the ear. Also lighten the earpink a tad. <span style="">22:07 Sun Jan 1

'Reuploaded The shading on the bum is supposed to be that light because of my light sorce, but I did darken it a little bit. The ear pink is now taken from the MC  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  23:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the rump and tail shading. <span style="">01:24 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded okay that's it's blurred as I could get it on pixlr  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  02:36, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose and add shading to the herbs. I'm sure you can blur the tail shading a bit more. <span style="">01:42 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded Comments? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The back shading is darker than the rest of the shading, lighten it, or darken the face, tail and hindleg shading. <span style="">04:35 Sat Jan 7

Okay I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else says so. It's the correct shading placement. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  19:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define your light source and even out the shading; the back shading is darken than the rest, either lighten the back or darken the rest of the shading and define the shading on the herbs. 22:24, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay the light source is from the back. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:24, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh yeah and I redid it. Derp forgot to say that! Anyway comments? Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  21:58, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. 00:23, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well the shading is the same darkness as the MC and the ear pink is the same nowe. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:31, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. <span style="">02:51 Wed Jan 11

Well sorry but if I do, it'll be inconsistent sorry. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  23:37, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the sides of the earpink. <span style="">21:37 Thu Jan 12

Reuploaded I didn't know what you mean, so I just blurred it more. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  16:20, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I mean you know how you smudged the pelt in the middle of the earpink? Smudge the sides of the pelt into the sides of the earpink. <span style="">14:26 Mon Jan 16

Lighten the shading on the shoulder a tad. 20:37, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  16:17, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ugh solids are boring! Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 01:10, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the sides of the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">21:41 Wed Jan 18

Okay not To be rude but it's the artists choice so.... No Sandlegs  What's up with  Leggy? 00:58, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Fix your sig Sandstorm, it has no links in it. XD And I kinda agree with Sweet... Is the earpink even artist's choice in this case? It looks kinda odd like this. The reason for smudging, is to make it look lie there's fur going into the ear, and this looks nothing like that, so either get rid of the smudging, or make it more like fur by smudging the edges too please. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:42, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Well I think it should be the artists choice! Anyway its just hard to see because of the back round. It is there though. Well anyway it's the twentyth so yeah... Try to be gentle when declining? Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 21:51, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

If/Since it's going to be declined...could I take over? 22:06, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sand's already got another charart, it looks like, so...Yeah...The eye color came directly from the MC image...So, if you want me to change it, I guess I will. 23:12, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Okay it looks like the ears don't have shading and blur it too. Lovely Daddy Sandlegs  What's up with  Leggy? 00:11, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the head shading or lighten the rest of the shading. <span style="">02:06, Fri, Jan, 20, 2012

Reuploaded - Bleh. Just Bleh. But, whatever. I redid it on Gimp, and the shading is the exact same from Stonestream's apprentice image...so...I hope it's alright. It's also on an 100% opacity, so...yeah...Comments? 01:34, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a while without comments, and I see nothing wrong, so CBA? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  20:26, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved 04:00, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ Approved
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? <span style="">23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. <span style="">00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. <span style="">00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) <span style="">23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. <span style="">21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD <span style="">00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Doesn't everyone? ;) <span style="">23:22 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading and the highlights. 01:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and no offence, but the shading is blurred enough and to the max. <span style="">11:08 Thu Dec 15

Darken the shading, on the rump especially. And have you tried Gaussian blurring it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always use gaussian blur for shading. <span style="">00:56 Sat Dec 17

Darken the shading and blur it 22:07, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want to darken it, because it will turn out black. <span style="">22:13 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:07 Sun Dec 18

Darken the shading and blur it. Make sure you're using the pencil tool when you're drawing on the lineart for the torn ear, as right now some of the pixels are semi-transparent. <span style="">01:22 Tue Dec 20

Re-uploaded I did use the pencil, but I erased some of the ear off first. That's probably why. <span style="">18:56 Tue Dec 20

Darn it. I was hoping to get this once Bluestar's kit alt. I'm working on was approved, but, oh well. Anyways, this looks a little too gray, with not enough blue, to me. Bluestar11796 19:02, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe I wanted it too, so as soon as Frostfur's loner was approved I quick reserved it. I colour picked off one of her other image, so I'm not comfortable about changing it. <span style="">19:12 Tue Dec 20

Define/Add shading to the farthest back leg. It is in the apprentice tutorial shading placement. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:37, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is the artist's choice, as long as it makes sense and there is a definite light source. Plus, I'm pretty sure there are other tutorials that show the shading a different way. I don't see anything wrong with the shading, except fo the fact that the the neck shading looks too black. <span style="">4:29 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Oh, add depth to the eyes. <span style="">4:31 AM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Add shading to the back leg farthest away from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 15:18, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is depth in the eyes, plus it's my choice anyways, and the shading placement is my choice, and it's fine. <span style="">17:19 Wed Dec 21

Can you try to match the nose color with the other images? It just looks a little bit off to me. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 13:54, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

It is off her leader image. So I don't intend to change it.<span style="">21:49 Fri Dec 23

Blur the smudged earpink. <span style="">23:47, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

I don't blur apprentice earpink, only smudge. :3 <span style="">01:29 Sat Dec 24

Sweetflower, I know you don't blur the earpink but it needs to be blurred, at least just a little. You can't blur by smudging of smudge by blurring. ;) Also, darken the shading on the hindleg farthest to us, and maybe lighten the shading on the flank just a tad. This is lovely. :3 22:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I caved. :D Just for you Stoneh! :P <span style="">03:11 Mon Dec 26

Make the highlight/lighter bit bigger on the face, and make all the highlights/lighter bits brighter. Also, make the belly completely shaded, chest and back foot farthest from us. And blur the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:38, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. I re-did her, she looked awful. <span style="">17:41 Wed Dec 28

I don't think changed are showing. <span style="">17:45 Wed Dec 28

Define the shading. I like this one. <span style="">01:55, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

(Just wondering) Can you see the changes? 'Caus eI can't. <span style="">02:15 Thu Dec 29

I think I can. thicken the lineart on the ear, and either add or brighten the highlights so it matched the leader image. Also, make the nose gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:41, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think you can see it Paleh! <span style="">18:55 Thu Dec 29

It's been 20 days, I think it's time this was CBA'd ._. 23:49, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be a nitpicker, but the slit in her ear needs to be sharper and the shading needs to be blurred more and darkened a tad. <span style="">10:52 Fri Dec 30

Re-uploaded. Nah, it's ok Wildheart. <span style="">17:12 Fri Dec 30

Restarting CBA. 22:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

O.e Ugh...So sorry but the highlights still need to be brightened a lot, on the leader image, they are like...silver. Bluestar is hard to do, I know, I tried tweaking the warrior version but I failed.... -- 17:40, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

o.e I don't use highlights. But if I have to add them I will.<span style="">19:48 Sat Dec 31

I agree with Stoney. You either need to add highlights or lighten the base colour a bunch and keep the shading at the same opacity it is now. <span style="">22:09 Sun Jan 1

Re-uploaded *Sigh* I didn't want to mess around with highlights, so I lightened the base colour. <span style="">02:18 Mon Jan 2

Still needs to be a bunch lighter. Check the leader image for reference. <span style="">02:01 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. <span style="">02:39 Tue Jan 3

Fix the nose, the shading placement looks off too. 20:39, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

The nose if fine, and the shading placement is my choice. <span style="">01:36 Wed Jan 4

Make the lineart completely black (not semi-transparent as it is now), blur the shading, and darken it. Make sure the shading extends to the lineart on the places where there aren't supposed to be "highlights". <span style="">01:44 Wed Jan 4 Re-uploADED. <span style="">02:10 Wed Jan 4

The blue seems too blue. Try to match it with her other images. Nice job! a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. Sorry for the wait y'all. <span style="">19:21 Thu Jan 5

Blur shadings A LOT 19:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Check the file page, changes aren't showing. <span style="">19:34 Thu Jan 5

Blur the shading still. 00:45, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">02:44 Sat Jan 7

The light source doesn't quite make sense. Fill the top of the haunch with shading and make a highlight in the middle of the back, add shading under the head and remove the light from her belly. Or if it's coming from eye-level from the front, move the tail highlight down. 04:38, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

And add another layer for the darker shading. <span style="">04:39 Sat Jan 7

o.e Ok, I tried to copy the apprentice tutorials, and I don't use highlights. I can tell this won't be approved by Monday, so I'm withdrawing.

May I take over, Sweet? 18:05, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Forgot to sign up there. And yeah, it's all your 'Teldy. (: <span style="">18:26 Sat Jan 7

I changed the heading if you don't mind. 20:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

If Bluestar's leader image will be tweaked to make it less purple, then won't this need to be redone?

Hopefully not. Reuploaded. 03:52, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well since they're being redone anyways, might as well start with this one. Maybe take the color from Mistystar's image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:45, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:48, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Looks great! =D 23:25, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x3 22:54, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">02:49 Mon Jan 16

Sorry but can you darken it a bit to match the leader and make the tear on the other side? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  16:26, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:18, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think Bluestar's been long enough without an apprentice image. CBA? :3 <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  16:14, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to interrput even though it's been 24 hours, but the ear needs to come down a little like it is on the leader...please don't kill me x.x  03:40, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face-- 21:02, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is fine on the face... <span style="">00:57 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded. Hmm...now where did I put your address....x3 Kidding <3 04:55, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. o3o <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  00:11, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved 04:00, January 25, 2012 (UTC)