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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. -- 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

These are lovely and I can't see anything to comment on, so CBA? 23:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but i feel like the blank looks slightly too crowded in general. notably the face (might help if you remove some of the lines on the ears ig?), and how does the blank look with those three lines removed on the cat's back leg? also, i feel like the tail still looks too straight–feel like a cats tail would naturally be more bent in such a position. 04:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

also, i feel like the linearart thickness is pretty uneven on the shorthaired blank– it's extremely thick on the cat's back and on the leg in which the paw pads are exposed but thin in other places. 04:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded The tail is based of something like this https://www.omlet.co.uk/images/cache/1024/604/Cat-Chartreux-a_plush_coated_chartreux_cat_lying_down.jpg]] with the tail being straight and just the tip being curled. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:39, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation
it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. top left corner. 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good!

'''reuploaded. '''

Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from this version, as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... ​​

Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base​ because she was the OA. 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. ​​

'''reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? 17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws.  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, too, overall. 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail. 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? 01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

After a month of it being on the approval page, the image will be declined, yes. Can you define the light on the tail, and just a tad bit on the front leg closest to us? 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the shading could still be lightened overall 02:45, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

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'''reuploaded. 23:08, July 27, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image still appears to be overblurred, try checking your layers for waste and removing it to reduce the blurryness. -- 23:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC) '''reuploaded. meadowslip, have mercy on me.'''

Lighten/smooth the shading. -- 01:36, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 03:00, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out more. Here's a little tip: If you're constantly being told to smooth out the shading, smooth it out a lot more than you usually do. I learned this and it really helps, trust me. -- 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. 19:47, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:59, July 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image has that overblurred look to it again. Try checking for waste to remove or see if the background is acting up. -- 20:02, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:56, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and add more shading depth in general to the image. -- 22:06, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:22, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some of the shading on the tail to define the lightsource, and add some more facial shading? 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 16:19, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing much light on the tail. -- 16:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 19:26, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the other half of the tail. -- 19:28, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reupreuploaded.

You're not defining the light on the correct tail section. Define it on >>> this side, away from the bend. -- 20:25, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you redline it, please? 20:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

When I can get the computer, I'll gladly make one for you. -- 21:46, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. 21:45, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

you go! Red is where there needs to be light, green is waste, and orange is where the shading needs to be defined. -- 21:53, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks, potato. 05:18, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Might you smooth out the tail shading and the shading on the visible back foot?

'''reuploaded. 18:59, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading on the back foot and tail, make sure you smooth it out when erasing. -- 16:51, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Leafpool (K) ~ For Approval
01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body should be thinner (you may have to add more after that), and the tips of the ears should be dark brown, too. 03:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't really be texture, just smudge lines from the stripes.

Reuploaded I might've did a thing 20:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are less curvy on her other images

The stripes also appear to be less soft and slightly sharper on the other images. -- 18:59, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Yes? No? Maybe? 02:27, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes more. -- 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Attempts were made 15:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes appear not as dark on the other images and they have this sketchiness to them...try running a small pencil tool on low opacity with the base color over the stripes and see how that works. 23:15, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes also look slightly overblurred

Reuploaded y'know I was so confident when I uploaded this the first time... 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

For a lack of better phrasing, the stripes on the other images seem less broken up. The dorsal stripe also seems to be thinner. Also, the stripes still seem overblurred

Reuploaded y'all are killing me 16:51, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Hey nice job on this, you're doing great^^ it might be my eyes, but the stripes seem a bit dark compared to her other images? And a little less blurred and more tapered at the ends. 23:22, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

On her other images, the stripes seem to connect with the dorsal stripe more often.

Reuploaded ok I fixed some of it but Patch I couldn't tell if you meant mine was too blurred or the others were blurred more.... I figured I'd end up having to upload this again anyway so 03:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

These ones looked a bit too blurred, more so on the face and tail (unless it's just my eyes?) I think the problem will be solved if you smudge them a bit, like how it looks on the MCA. The stripes on here still need to be lightened, and looking at the MCA which is on the same side, it looks like the stripe placement doesn't quite match up to what you've got on here. 14:33, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

I originally matched the mca and then vec said the stripes were too thick even though that's what the mca had :/ 23:44, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Gorsetail (TNP) (W) ~ For Approval
I think the shading needs to be smoothed some :/ also not sure how the tint came out 03:22, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Yes the shading is very blotchy. Could you expand it some on the haunch? That should help. And maybe de-saturate the tint a bit? 04:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading from the haunch is leaking onto the leg, and the shading is leaking on the back paw farthest from us. -- 15:15, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading entirely 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget your sig! Smooth out the shading overall. -- 17:05, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded idk what you're talking about I totally put my sig in last time 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the shading on the top haunch curve downward more? 23:18, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ?? 03:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah that looks good. Can you smooth the shading on the back of the shoulder? smooth it on the top of the haunch too. 14:36, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (Alt. W) ~ CBA
ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT 3/3 04:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Same as above, but, could you also smooth out the lineart tweak a little for her leg? The bottom bit of the leg shouldn't slant upwards that much, I don't think, and could stand to be a little more horizontal? If you'd like, I could give a redline for what I mean?

Same as above, soften the texture and add more shading to the chest. -- 15:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Hey Max! A redline guide would be much appreciated! I tried going off Deadfoot but uhhh, his twisted paw is on the other side of the warrior, unfortunately. 16:07, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

re-up istill wanna get that redline but i tried it again just for my sake 16:33, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the leg, to make it more consistent with the image's lineart. -- 20:04, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reup 04:12, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart more around the paw area, but the leg area looks fine. -- 04:16, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Here ya go Bramble; here's my quick as redline - hope it helps! There'd also be another line where the paw connects to the leg, to show a bit of a twist - like on Deadfoot's old warrior for reference :D

re-up thank you SO much max 20:23, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the leg a bit, since a cat's leg is not that thin. -- 20:33, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

re-up forgot i was working onthis until i saw theother one get approved oops 01:36, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

The lineart seems slightly choppy on the paw, so smooth it out a bit? I also think that little triangle of lineart under the front paw should be removed as well. -- 01:46, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up you talking about the toe? 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

The toe on the raised leg, yes. Could you add more lineart to round it out a teeny bit more? Just so it doesn't look as pointy as it is now. -- 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reup i personally likethe look of the toe, could we get a second opinion on that 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think in order to match the rest of the lineart, adding a few more pixels to curve it wouldn't hurt. Could you also remove the random line/lineart down the middle of the tip of the tail? 02:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up the tail thing oops, so is that an okay on the toe lmao. also i dont know how to go about curving so tried something, tell me how it went! 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think the paw can be curved a bit more. If you need a redline to help I can provide one^^ 23:15, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

hi patch! that would be soooo helpful. Its stressing me out atm hahaha 04:08, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go hope that helps! 15:45, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

reup thanks patch ! 16:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:27, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Leopardstar (W) - For Approval
this was so hard why was this so hard, mainly reffed the starclan  00:29 Mon Jul 29

No one knows Can you define the tail stripes a teeny bit more? -- 00:31, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">04:56 Mon Jul 29

it's a mounty pattern I think there's more variety in spot size, and the base seems lighter on the apprentice image, which came first.

Hi uh I don't know if I have a right to say this here but do the eyes look a bit funny? They kind of look like they are facing different ways (The opposite of cross eyes) Sorry if it isn't my place to say this! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:23, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the eyes look fine. -- 01:38, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you fox for the file!! <span style="">04:13 Thu Aug 1

There's a line of waste by the tail. -- 21:55, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

i believe that with this source, the shading on <== side of the face wouldn't look so prominent. 02:34, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">01:04 Sat Aug 3

this looks good! one final critique is that some shading could be added to the cheek to make it less prominent. i dont believe the cheek would protrude that much for it to be exposed to that much light with this source. 04:32, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth the shading?

reuploaded thanks burnt! <span style="">00:12 Sun Aug 4

Dark-colored ThunderClan kit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Hopefully you guys like it? Im really not good at shading because there are no tutorials for Pixlr char art --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:11, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Since this is from a manga, this needs to be in grayscale and needs a lighter muzzle. -- 23:13, July 30, 2019 (UTC) It is? What is grayscale? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:31, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Grayscale is the default manga color, so this must be defaulted to a darker gray. Could you also define the shading? -- 23:32, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

So a dark grey? With grey eyes? or can they stay green. And I can try shading but I dont know how to chade on Pixlr X which is what I need to use now... Thanks! Also Is there any other single colour blanks to do? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:37, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I would probably use a different program than Pixlr, such as GIMP or FireAlpaca, which are both free. Only the pelt would have to be in grayscale, the eyes and ear/nose pink can be any color you wish. You shade by getting a color, using the pencil tool to draw it on the pelt, lighten it, then blur/smudge it. -- 23:41, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I have a chromebook and am only allowed to use pixlr X... Im confused also by what you mean RIP... and ok! SO a dark grey pelt Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:43, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so you have a color wheel, right. Well, click on any color you want, then get your paintbrush/pencil tool and paint it following a clear light source like this, and then blur/smudge it with the respective tools to get a nice, smooth gradient. -- 23:46, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I cant use the blur tool won't work? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:53, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Try setting the blur tool at 100% strength and check the hard-edged box and see if it works then. -- 23:55, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

It seemingly appears pixely and won't smooth out? Sorry if this is getting long... Should I delete MY messages? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, all messages must stay on the approval page until the image is archived. I'd say post for now, and wait for further instruction. please excuse my lack of knowledge -- 00:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Its cool, Thank you! I will try to do it as best as possible. Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

NOOOO I just finished but then my wifi went out before I had saved it 0.o Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:39, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better? I have a version with the pencil lines but it doesn't look very good. If you dont like it could you fix the blur as pixlr just wont? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:31, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Please do not thumb your images. I've also renamed this to File:BP.kit-4.png so please continue to reupload over there. I'd also like to reiterate what Potato said that it is probably best if you do not use Pixlr, as it does not have a good history with images in this project. There are other free art programs, such as GIMP and Firealpaca, that can make this process easier; plus there are several members of the project who are familiar with those programs.

The shading should be darkened a little more, and maybe smoothed out. Your light source looks very good. ^^ 01:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I found a tool but it is a bit hard to use... would this next reupload be more along the right lines? Also whats Thumbing? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Thumbing is when the file name has a |left/right/thumb thing in the file name. To remove it, simply go into source editor and remove it from the name. -- 01:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded uhh ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Upload under the name Vec gave you. Smooth out the shading everywhere, and Remove the waste that's outside the lineart. -- 02:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think that might be the best I can do shading wise :( I did upload under BP.kit but i called it BP.kit-5? Hopefully, that was right... And can do! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:04, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, you need to upload over File:BP.kit-4.png. Simply click on the link, scroll down and click "Upload new version of file". Also, remove some of the shading on the tail and front limb; a similar light source that's easy to see is File:Dawnpelt.kit.alt.png. See how smooth the shading is and it's not covering all of the limbs? Try to match that. 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the base quite a bit, since the description is dark-colored kit. -- 02:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I'm back and ready for action! (I rage quitted yesterday because I had the PERFECT art but didn't save it and the Wifi went out Rip) Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 22:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Is this more along those lines? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:10, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

It's looking better, though I would recede the shading some, darken the earpink, and smooth out the shading on the tail. -- 01:13, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Please re-upload over File:BP.kit-4.png like you were told to do. 01:24, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I tried but it didn't work? I was gonna tell you but I forgot :( and ok Greenflower! Btw what do you mean recede the shading some? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:27, August 1, 2019 (UTC) Fixed! --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:30, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

By recede, I mean remove. -- 01:40, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Un-thumbed, Moved to Bp.kit-4, and '''Re-upped! T'''his a bit better? You guys are really picky about your charart rip me and my lil Pixlr editor Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:16, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Remember not to thumb your images. Darken the earpink a little bit. -- 03:41, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste by the haunch. 05:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Nettle (DotC) (W) - For Approval
I really love how the texture came out on this. -- 02:53, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

i like it too! she looks pretty cross eyed. 03:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! -- 03:12, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Right now it almost looks like there's none. 03:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 03:37, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the main body and maybe smooth out the shading there? It looks... off right now for lack of a better word. 12:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:32, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the haunch shading, especially adding some near the bottom to add the curve, and expand/define the facial shading? 00:13, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 00:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The texture seems more defined on the other images. 17:27, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 20:29, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The texture could still be sharper, almost like Lizardtail's warrior but a bit softer. 21:50, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like dis? -- 02:06, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the back leg and shoulder shading more with the shape of the space? A bit like this sort of shape

Try using longer strokes with a small brush for the texture. 18:31, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the texture was a pain but it was worth it -- 18:49, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more texture maybe? <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 17:47, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now I'm liking this better. -- 17:53, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Mud Paws (W) - CBA
<span style="">04:38 Thu Aug 1

Might you smooth out the overall shading a bit? I love what you've got going here, Splook! Another wonderful image. =) ​​

reuploaded thank you! <span style="">01:02 Sat Aug 3

I think the texture should be slightly softer overall. 18:33, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">20:02 Sat Aug 3

This looks really nice, CBA? 15:26, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Mintkit (YS) (K) - For Approval
One of the most depressing kit deaths in the series. -- 22:08, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly re-arrange the eye here? I'm having a lot of issues seeing the coloring and it just looks like it's white-and-black. ​​​

Reuploaded -- 01:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the foreleg and head shading just a bit more? 21:46, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 02:07, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading just a tad on the haunch? 15:25, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 16:24, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt W) - For Approval
and so, the stars have aligned, allowing me to revive. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:35, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's quite a bit of waste floating around her (mostly around the back and tail). -- 23:51, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any stripes over the white chest. 23:58, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

no prob thas easy reups <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 00:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Same with Cricket, and she looks a little cross-eyed? 03:50, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Cricket (AFD) (Ki) - For Approval
im not sure i got the haunch stripes right (im gonna toy with them for a little bit still probably) but other than that i feel good about this <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:38, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little shading to the ear farthest from us? -- 23:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 00:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth? 03:49, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) - CBA
Tried out an eye style that I liked. Not sure if I like my pupil job though.. -- 00:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Same with Mintkit, I'm not really seeing any coloring in these eyes at all. If possible, could you just use the multiple kinds of styles we already use? It's a bit off-putting and jarring. Or perhaps try and thin out the amount of black you're using so it shows more color? ​​

Reuploaded -- 01:17, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the shading could be defined just a bit more, and the tail shading smoothed a bit. 01:28, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 02:13, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:34, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mistfeather (Ki) - CBA
03:28, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

would you mind adding a very light layer of shading to the cheek? the shading right now is making it look like she has overly puffed up cheeks. 04:23, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:24, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Mousefang (K) - For Approval
ok this. thats it. thats the response. 04:07, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Do you want the file for her other images? I'm more than willing to send it your way. ​​​

that would be so incredibly useful! email is meilinggesslerv2@gmail.com thakn you so much skye. 05:12, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She's on her way! You'll find that the shading and highlights aren't quite what they seem to be with this set. =P ​​

re-up Thanks skye!!! 05:47, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes look darker here than her other images

re-up 15:40, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (Ki) ~ CBA
matching old warrior 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the texture? i believe old warrior had it as per beebs' style

Reuploaded 14:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:23, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ For Approval
^

06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe the shading could be smoothed out overall 04:35, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

same as the kit ^

Reuploaded

14:09, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the haunch? This is really good! <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 06:32, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Mintfur (SkC) (W) ~ For Approval
tabbies are 100x harder when its 2 in the morning 06:32, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading 04:59, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:10, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Idk if it's just my eyes, but I think the other images have more stripes and they're more compact with each other. 18:41, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:08, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Swiftflight (W) - For Approval
07:24, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste where the tail curls, and what's the light source? 15:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

This looks more white, or even cream, than anything... if possible, could you darken the color just a smidge?

reup <== 03:50, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

So it's really obvious on a black background, but there's waste. Also, I really hate to say this, but it's still looking really cream-ish.

reup 06:32, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? I'm having a hard time seeing any. 21:52, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Lightning Tail (Ki) - CBA
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CBA? 18:36, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
18:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred and need to be thinner. Define the eye depth and light on the foreleg. -- 18:57, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She needs short fur. 18:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

oh shoot, sorry patch. 19:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

This needs to match to the apprentice's side in terms of the stripes. -- 20:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt W) - CBA
04:20, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:19, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Newtspeck (K) ~ For Approval


I think the ginger parts appear a tiny bit lighter in some areas on her other images? 15:22, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Pouncetail (RC) (W) - CBA
04:51, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:22, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Minty (KP) (K) - For Approval
babie <span style="">06:24 Sat Aug 3

smooth out the shading where the tail and the haunch meets, along withthe shading on al the paws 16:20, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded its hard to see the shading on the black so i hope i smoothed it out enough <span style="">00:13 Sun Aug 4

Little Mew(K) - CBA
16:10, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

re-up 16:19, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:56, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Runningnose (Ki) ~ For approval
ive had a horrendously bad couple of weeks, so forgive me if its notgreat 21:20, August 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mistkit (TC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:12, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Mintpaw (CJ) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:12, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Moss (KP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:12, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch shading a bit more? 18:00, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sparrow (cat) (W) ~ For Approval
almost died twice this boi <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 16:45, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the face and chest, and perhaps curve it along with the chest a bit more as well? how is still alive -- 16:47, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 17:01, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the very top of the shoulder, and more depth to the stomach triangle and front leg closest to us? -- 17:04, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 17:45, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Remove some of the shading along <--- side of the leg, and add some to the top of the shoulder (the top curve of the leg; lineart near the neck). 17:59, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Littlecloud (K) ~ For Approval
16:59, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Mouse Ear (W) ~ For Approval
Last time I struggled with making the ears small enough. I hope I did it right this time lol. 16:59, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Needs a torn ear. 17:13, August 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups who tore his little ear? that's sad 17:40, August 4, 2019 (UTC)