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Polly (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay so I didn't know I even had Photoshop, and then Snowed gave me the file, and I have zero idea how to get the colors so oopsies. wow that's a looooot of layers snowed how do you even keep track

idk man I just do. it must be magic. also, define the texture.

re-up changes if needed.

Stripes look thicker/more dense on kittypet, and thin out the M on the forehead a little

So, what do you want me to do about the stripe issue? keep in mind that this is a kit image, so stripes are obviously going to be thinner and smaller. Also, seeing as these blanks are in different positions. . . you get the point. Not asking for a second opinion. . . just asking Snowfall to clarify.

Know you're not asking for another opinion, but I know these blanks are a pain in the ass to match designs with, and sometimes you gotta cram tons of stripes into one place. I think it's fine.

The only reason I even mentioned the stripes was because on the kittypet there's more dark brown than light brown showing but I get that it's a small blank and a different angle. Though I still think the M should be more thin if you can make it that, and smooth out the top -> side of the M as well. Lastly, define shading depth a tad?

re-up I'm hesitant to do this, because I don't want it to be too red.

The "M" stripe on the kittypet image has a much more defined shape and is less curved, if that makes sense? Nice image. 18:42, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes should be smudged a bit.

re-up thanks

maybe smudge out the stripes a lil' more, just to give that rougher effect that the KP has

re-up

Define the shading some more. 20:02, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

The light brown spot on the haunch (I think?) near the back paw looks a little out of place, for a lack of a better word. Try smudging the shading towards that area, or just fill it with shading, since there are plenty of blanks that have shading in that specific spot. 00:24, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I hope this is what you mean?

There's waste in the area between the main body and tail. 22:23, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

re-up O.o don't know how that didn't save in gimp

could u like desaturate the shading a lil? i like tints and all but it kinda makes the right side look really, really red :) like maybe just play with the hues or smth 16:38, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

o and it should also fix the problem with shading depth which could stand to be defined a lil as well 16:38, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Still feel like the shading needs a lot of depth. Remember, depth isn't the same as defining the shading. It's adding a thinner, darker layer of shading to made it more 3 dimensional

re-up

Try and add a little more depth to the shading; I can't see terribly much of a difference between the last upload imo

Snail Shell (A) ~ For Approval
I really am proud of this, hope you like it. PepperPiper11 (talk) 18:24, July 5, 2017 (UTC) This is great, Pepper. Define the shading and shading depth. 18:30, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some smaller speckles, kind of like the kit has? This is beautiful.

Smooth out the shading on the furthest hind leg? 18:41, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Purdy! Add some shading to <-- ear and define the earpink in --> ear? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 18:43, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks everyone! PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:07, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think the colors are off a little, because when I was making the warrior, Skye told me that the kit is based off Ashfur's colors

Reuploaded  I did use highlights, that might be the reason why, but I did colorpick the colors again. ^^ PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:28, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

You did a good job for your first image! Define the earpink in the -> ear. Any chance I could get a picture of the image of the image without the highlights? If the white are the highlights, then I would say tone them down a little bit. 19:47, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to match the kit's. I also suggest colorpicking from the kit, as it is the first one in the set. :) This is really good, Pepper, you've got a lot of artistic talent, considering this is your first charart. 20:11, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, as it looks like it's throwing off the coloring. The kit is the first one in this set, as Shypaw said.

Reuploaded Thanks, Shypaw! I colorpicked from the kit, and deleted the highlights. PepperPiper11 (talk) 13:46, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the spots look a little too big, and try smudging them

Reuploaded 15:40, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch a little bit? 18:48, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

SNAILS anyway you should try and soften the spots and make them more round (they look too pointy rn) to match the other images. in addition, i think there are also less spots on the other images :] 00:43, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

on his other images it looks like there are more very faint speckles throughout his pelt. maybe smooth the shading on the hind leg closest to us. 17:20, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

This can be for approval now because it meets that guideline :)

Reuploaded Thx Spooky! 00:18, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the arms, paws, shoulders, and perhaps the back leg. 20:03, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:48, July 11, 2017 (UTC)

The chest shading near the shoulder appears to be leaking away from the lineart

Add some more dapples on the legs and paws, and make the patch on the tail-tip reach the lineart. It looks like it's leaking a bit from the top. 00:27, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:53, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Add a few more dapples to the head.

Reuploaded  20:22, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Apologies for the lack of comments, Pepper. It's been a busy week for me. Anyways, the dapples should be smaller and more broken up. I used a certain brush in Photoshop to get the effect that I have on the kit... what program are you using to make this? It'll help me describe in better detail exactly how to get the effect that I used.

It's OK Snow. I am on vacation and don't get back till Tuesday or Wednesday. I don't have the file with me either. So i can't re upload it till I get back. ;-; 13:21, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Mosspaw (SC) (A) ~ For Approval
Hey y'all. I can't smudge. 19:45, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the farthest ear

Define shading, maybe? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 19:48, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ew, waste. 20:01, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's a white streak of waste in the top left corner.

Mind defining the shading a little more? 22:25, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

The patches aren't smudged right. They seemed to be more smudged in a upper right direction, and are more feathery? Sorry, i can't explaing stuff.

Reups oh, I'm horrible at explaining stuff too, star. I touched up some of the smudges. I think I got what you were saying idk? 02:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smoothen out the shading on the head? :) It looks a little bit blotchy. }

Reups 01:06, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Hawkwing (Alt D) - For Approval
Shown as solid in HJ manga. Pretty sure this is the right blank. 17:43, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

He looks tinted blue? That may be my screen though. Smooth out the shading, and manga images don't have texture.

Reuploaded Turns out he actually was tinted blue 18:02, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

Is that a highlight on his muzzle? Can you smoothen it out? It looks sharp. Also, smooth out the shading. :) 20:24, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

It appears to be the paler muzzle he was shown with in the manga.

If he's shown as solid, shouldn't he just be solid dark gray? And why does he have a pale muzzle? 21:14, 7/18/2017

He was shown as a solid regular gray with a lighter muzzle. When I added the cite for the manga's mistake, I forgot to add the paler muzzle. I'll add it now.

because he looks like this. 21:22, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

rip me sorry 21:25, 7/18/2017

Reuploaded Like as said above, it's the paler muzzle. But I did smooth it out a little bit. 21:45, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the shoulder.

You mind darkening him a bit to match the color he's shown as a bit more?

Reuploaded 20:18, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad on the furthest front leg? 03:08, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:12, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Ki) - For Approval
This probably doesn't match well. 19:47, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, shading depth, and smooth the shading a bit.

Reuploaded 20:09, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It might just be me but she looks tinted yellow compared to the other images. 20:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

^^I see the yellow tint too.

Reuploaded I put a shading tint on the image. (if that's what you're talking about) Sorry, I should have said something about that. 21:14, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on her other images seem more... Clustered, for the lack of a better word. If you'd like, I can try and dig up the file for the ES. (Though my attempt at matching her pattern is pretty bad hh)

In between the thick tail stripes should be very thin, hardly noticeable stripes, i think.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better. :) And Fox, you don't have to dig the file out, you probably have so many other files and my computer doesn't load email anyway. 01:51, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the face and chest? Also, do you think you could curve the neck shading rather than having it be sort of a straight line, if that makes sense? 01:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

awww she's so cute (he?) ((: a suggestion is maybe u could extend the stripes to the empty area on the right hand side? cuz there should be stripes on her haunch area. 04:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Gah this is so hard to explain *.* but I feel like the stripes on her other images aren't as... Messy? Like they seem to form a more orderly pattern, if you get me. There also appears to be texture on her other images, so that also needs to be added.

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt. :) Hopefully this is close to what you meant, Fox. :D 00:35, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 23:36, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Ki) - For Approval
Demonic small blanks. And yes, before you ask, the entire side of the image is supposed to be white. This pattern isn't meant to be very visible from the front.

There's white waste above the right ear. :) 05:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also blurred a couple things.

Could you swap either the flank shading or the facial shading so that the light source is consistent?

I knew I messed something up with this. I'll fix the head shading in the morning... this is the one source that still confuses me, even after almost six years of being a lead. =/

If you plan to swap the head shading then the shading on that -> leg also needs to be swapped (dw I get confused too xd)

could you maybe define/darken the shading depth :] love her new pattern hh (her old one is still the best) 20:27, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Her original pattern was the best, hands down. But noooo, that stupid tortie vote happened. =/ I will forever be bitter about it, and there ain't anything anyone can say that will make me believe otherwise.

I might be wrong -- light sources really aren't my thing -- but I still think that the head shading should swapped to be consistent with the source shown on the rest of the image. 13:07, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

I get that you're upset about the tortie vote, but with this new citation this pattern would've happened anyway :/ 13:31, 7/24/2017

The tortie vote happened ... you are allowed to be bitter, but I do not believe protesting like that gets us anywhere. Can you smooth out the shading? 23:35, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (Ki) - For Approval
I hate how gross this is but. Here he is. (Also, sorry for snatching this literally 5 minutes after it was declined, I've had my eyes on this dude for practically forever)

Smooth out the shading? It's alright man, it's free game once it's declined.

reups Properly smoothed shading? I don't know her.

Can you define the shading and possibly expand it?

reups I hated the shading so I redid it and it's still bad but it's a little better

i think the shading between the legs covers too much area, it kinda makes it look like theres a dent where his (her?) stomach should be 20:29, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused, is it because I have not worked on this chaart in a while that someone else can do it? Cause thats ok I don't really care. Actually, thanks for doing it I needed help. I'm just confued on the rules. Or is it because it was declined

Oh i see never mind XD

Bananablue42903 (talk) 17:08, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking in one spot on ---> leg. 17:43, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a little bit? 18:13, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

reups played with some layer settings i'm so bad at smooth shading or any shading at all

reups fixed some stuff. I just realized one reason this sucks is because it's the first solid colored kit image I've done and I hate solid colored cats that also don't have texture. Shading is impossible.

Mistmouse (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
Dayum son 15:46, 7/25/2017

Speckletail (Alt Q) - For Approval
All colors except the stripes obviously are from her regular queen. 15:57 Tue Jul 25

well i mean technically if you do it like this, she should have black stripes on her normal image and she shouldn't get an alt then 16:00, 7/25/2017

Reuploaded I just didn't know if I would have been required to keep the same base. This looks better anyways and not as...pastel vomit-y (for lack of a better way to descibe it) with a duller toned base. 16:05 Tue Jul 25

Can you add some shading to the -> ear? It looks flat rn

Sweetpaw (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
now 100% smudge and blur free 21:10, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the back? 23:05, July 25, 2017 (UTC)