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Squirrelflight (L) - For Approval
The Queen ugh this pattern 20:58 Tue Apr 9

Can you add her torn ear? 21:00, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think this might be a Wikia thing, but her eyes seem lighter than her other images? Also, I love the bushy tail, it makes me happy. ​​​​​​

Maybe smooth out the shading on the <-- front leg? It looks really sharp compared to the rest of the shading. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:05, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the deputy that tail gives me life 21:52 Tue Apr 9

I believe she needs a torn eartip? Maybe I'm wrong though.

01:58, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

I agree that the eyes look darker on her other images

Reuploaded Then the eyes need darkened on the deputy. I may also mess with the tail to make it bushier. 14:38 Wed Apr 10

Could you smooth the shading on the white paw? Looks a lot more sharp there than elsewhere

I agree the tail needs to be bushier

Reuploaded This is handdrawn shading not texture. And she does have the white paw, her floof just covers a lot of it 17:32 Fri Apr 12

can you define the shading on the body a little bit? 22:30 Fri Apr 12

can you thicken the linearart on the tail? 01:24, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the tail/body shading just a bit?  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:23, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the ear shading. It's very sharp compared to the other bits 'n pieces of shading. 16:50, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Just letting the leads know, I have an exam this Wednesday I need to finish studying for. I plan on uploading tomorrow but in case I don't do it til Thursday that is why. 22:57 Mon Apr 15

Reuploaded I am done messing with the shading style >> 21:01 Thu Apr 18

She looks a bit cross-eyed

Reuploaded I think I fixed it? It may have been the reflected light 14:59 Fri Apr 19

can you smooth the shading out on the tail and the chest? 06:46, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:31 Sat Apr 20

Honestly the pattern on her tail should match the apprentice's, as that came first.

gray warrior- for evauation
i know theirs no shading going to add it laterWillowstep12 (talk) 13:53, April 10, 2019 (UTC) reuploaded  added the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:42, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try! But can you desaturate the ear and nosepink? It's very neon as is, you should add some darker and lighter shades to the eye for gradient, the shading need darkening, and heavy expansion. Squidward Plays All  Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:06, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded is the earpink desaturated anoghtWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add shading and define your light source. I can't tell if there is shading. <span style="">16:24 Wed Apr 10

reuploadedWillowstep12 (talk) 17:24, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, and add shading to the back foot closest to us. Connect the shading on the front leg closest to us. There should be more shading depth to the image. 21:36, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also use some smoothing, and shading on the tail either needs to be added or defined, I believe. I think the current earpink darkness is alright, but it could use some desaturation to dull it. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded smoothed shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:50, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed more and the depth needs to be defined, all over. Define it especially on the back paws and tail. Line art appears to be blurred by the tail and front paw closest to us. Could you possibly desaturate the earpink and nose a little too? I think a paler pink would complement the gray better. 18:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

i wont be active for a week so please dont reject thisWillowstep12 (talk) 19:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? You only have a limit of ten days to reupload. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Flutterkit (Ki) - For Approval
hi this is my warrior cats son <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:39, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, as all WindClan cats are given short fur unless stated otherwise. 00:55, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

reups didn't even know that was a rule but whatever. i liked it better long but its not like im allowed to argue <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:24, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, that's a rule we put into effect a couple years ago based on statements in the series. Given you're not super active, it's not all that much of a shock that you didn't know. There's no need to be as harsh as you were, though. ​​​

Brighten up the white. 01:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink slightly Malina457 (talk) 18:09, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups sorry took me a bit to reup was busy. i tried but dont really know if I succeeded.. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:35, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Is it just me or does he look green?

it doesn't look green to me. could you define the light on the tail and paws?

idk from my screen he does look a little bit green as well 11:36, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

it looks like a green shade as well. 15:43, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

He doesn't look green on my phone or PC, Moony said it didn't either but 3 people also say it's green.. I know that I made the base a warm brown and the shading is red I've no clue why it's looking green for some people.. Orr how to make it less green for those three people. I'll re-up for light on the paws/tail like Moony said tonight though and I'll see what I can do about this weird green thingy <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:50, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Try #290f01 for the brown. 16:48, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry Potato, but in all honesty I don't really like that shade of Brown and I'd rather try something else of my own choosing before I were to try that color. No offense I just don't really like it and I'd rather try a few things of my own choosing as the artist. ;; <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 17:39, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

reups i decided to redo the shading aswell, hopefully the new shading looks alright and hopefully the green is fixed? idk whats going on with the green but i tried. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:10, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up. Can you link with changes? 23:24, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

wow, thats really weird. It showed fine when i did Desktop Preview while making the edit? Wikia what drugs you takin?? Hopefully it's fixed now. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:29, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

It's now showing up ;) 00:51, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the edges of the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:00, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

reups i tried scrubbing him with the blur tool, idek if it made a difference. This is as smooth as ive been able to get it <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't shoot me.. but he still looks green.. perhaps opt for a darker shade of brown..? *gets shot* 22:06, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Imo looks even greener now Malina457 (talk) 05:20, April 16, 2019 (UTC)malina

I guess I'll try to touch the Brown a bit again. I'm going to play with it slowly though. I want it to still look a certain way so I'm just gonna change it slowly until it starts looking less green for people and still looks good to me. But I'll actually also take a look at the shading again and just see if I can smooth it out anymore. I actually do want to try and smooth it on the brown. If I can. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:22, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

reups i actually kind of like this better <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:30, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Brighten the white everywhere except for the face. It looks really gray. 23:08, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

The whites fine, otherwise you run the risk of losing shading definition on it 21:05 Thu Apr 18 2019

Rootpaw (App)- For Approval
Here he is! Comments? First time trying texture. I freaking love him and his parents. Also, will remove that waste in a moment. 01:41, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:46, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, define the eye depth and add some shine to them as well. The shading appears to be leaking from the shading and on the chest next to the leg line art. Lighten the earpink too, it looks super dark. It also looks like there's some waste by the head. 02:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll fix all these things tomorrow! Ah, I was suspicious something was bugging me. 02:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded will fix more stuffs tomorrow 02:23, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Also, if your light is coming from the front, there some be some light on the fronts of the forelegs and the chest 02:25, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Leaking shading by the belly and haunch, waste by the tail tip and shoulder/neck Malina457 (talk) 03:02, April 11, 2019 (UTC)malina

Try connecting the body texture to the hindleg texture. Right now the Hindleg texture just weirdly cuts off. (Something like this, excuse my sloppiness -> ) Tinystream (talk) 03:30, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

vary the texture slightly more so that it doesnt look as paintbrushy. i suggest using a smudge tool and running it in the direction of fur/drawing more texture lines. in addition, her color looks unrealistically saturated and slightly green. i suggest googling light ginger cats and color picking for a realistic base color 04:29, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw should have shorthair lineart b/c it never said he had long fur--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:07, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

fur length is artist's choice when unstated. 09:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC) Understood--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked off Tree's MCA. Why does that look unrealistic? Malina, can you circle where? 13:05, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

IMO the image looks slightly green. Might be because of the texture/shading, but it could stand to be tweaked


 * I think it also has something to do with the black/blue based shading on top of yellow. I know shading tint is artist's choice but I think you'll have less problems if you used a darker orange or even red on top of yellow 16:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll try to address all of your comments! I learned from reading an archive that red is a good shade for yellow cats (Gooseberry's queen I think). I'll reupload later. Also yep fur length is my choice, I made him to resemble his "weird" father. 22:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:39, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

There’s some waste by the tail and ears! On the edges of the image/canvas. -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:53, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Around the ENTIRE tail. (my bold isnt working, sorry) Malina457 (talk) 00:14, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina

this is turning out better. you need to define the shading everywhere, and also smooth it out on the tail and the belly. it appears that the shading is leaking in some places, which is probably a result of abusing the blur tool. in this case i still highly recommend the smudge tool at 10-20 px to achieve the same effect as the blur tool, but better without the risk of having the shading leaking 00:28, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:25, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading on the backleg furthest from us --

03:36, 4/12/2019

Seems like the shading is leaking on the chest, legs and tail. also can you smooth out the shading on the legs and tail? the texture also needs to follow the fur flow. what you have here looks like it's crisscrossing

Reuploaded redid shading with a lot of smoothing out, will reup for waste in a momento 22:49, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste has been killed via lasso 22:57, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can u define shading on the left side of it's face? Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:31, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any shading with my source there, I think. I'll check my reference image to see if I need to place some there though. 23:50, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading everywhere/define the gradient. 01:11, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded also darkened the shading a bit. 01:40, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

it still needs smoothing out

Reuploaded oh StarClan halp the shading is icky now 02:39, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

not sure if you removed the texture but i can't really see it on my screen? also sorry to be a pain  perhaps the shading could be blurred/smudged/smoothed out more

I did remove the texture- I was struggling with it. I'll blur (and possibly redo) the shading again tomorrow. 05:17, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste will be gone in a jiffy 14:19, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:22, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, define the depth on the chest, and smooth it out slightly on the haunch 01:54, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reuploaded will remove waste later. 14:20, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:43, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

The edges of the shading should be smoothed and can youd define the texture? You said there was texture but I'm not seeing any at all? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:25, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I said I removed it- look under Moonyy's comment. 16:29, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix that haunch shading. 16:41, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ahh much better *pats Rootpaw* 16:46, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and leg shading. ​​​​​

Reuploaded  18:19, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing where the shading has been smoothed out. Could you try smoothing the edges? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:57, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:05, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light on that front leg (the upper part) and smooth out the shading there

With the approval of Moss, you've been upgraded to an apprentice and this can now say "for approval" ^^ 13:22, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Shading seems to be leaking on the hind leg closest to us, and the front paw furthest away from us. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:45, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a bit on the shoulder, tail, and front paw farthest from us? Dunno if it's just me, but the shading on the front of the body looks darker than the rest. could you either darken the rest of the shading to match that or lighten that area a little? Define the shading in the ears. 15:34, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Also needs blue eyes. 16:19, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Vec! I'll reup later. 22:14, April 16, 2019 (UTC) Wikia will not let me upload him, it doesn't say under the bottom of the file history "Upload a new version of this file". For now, look here for changes. 22:50, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded at last. 22:51, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reuploaded looks like he's in a sunset now. 00:54, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste next to the left ear, the left leg, and in between the hind legs <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:28, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

About depth: you seem to be just darkening the shading in general. the image could still use a thinner, darker layer of shading

Define the eye depth and add some light on the chest

Reuploaded 3 times aghhh Spooky you just said that when I was defining the depth XD. Can you circle where? Will define the eye depth now. 21:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded let's hope I didn't kill his eyes with the burn tool. 21:53, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

The source you seem to be aiming for resembles this; so to where that has light.

Reuploaded  02:24, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

define the light on the legs

Reuploaded  15:18, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Pigeonfoot (W) ~ For Approval
ok uhm not sure about this one rip

23:38, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth some? <span style="">04:42 Sun Apr 14

Reuploaded

16:48, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the pupil? I'm having a hard time distinguishing it from the eye depth/gradience. 12:50, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

dull the highlights very slightly on the back; almost looks like a diff colored dorsal stripe

Reuploaded

22:18, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:31, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Ouch sorry to be that person, but I feel as if the shading cuts off too abruptly where it stops on the shoulder/arm of the < front leg, perhaps have it extend upwards a bit more and taper off smoother. I also feel as if the shading on the white is a touch too dark, and the eyes could have more of the lighter color for depth, to match the app.

Reuploaded 14:37, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

The tail shading on the underside of the ^ part of the tail is leaking into the v part of the tail, if that makes sense. It looks like there's a jagged line of gray on the white that's not supposed to be there. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  05:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:24, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Plumstone (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

For some reason wikia isn't showing jt but from the discord inage, her design should match File:Plumstone.apprentice.png also be sure to not thumb images as it messes with the format. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:31, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and dull the ear/nosepink, as it looks rather neon. 06:23, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does it look now? 00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

She has to match her apprentice. The body is facing a different direction granted, but the Head still the same direction and some of the side the Apprentice shows is visible. You must match her colors to that as they do not match up right now, and match basic patch placement, and smoothness. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 11:37, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, smudge the patches, and smooth out the shading. 22:03, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I used #dd983d for the patches mixed with #844711, and black with a low opacity. #553c33 for the earpink. Eyes should be amber, base for that is #dca864 I think. The black base is just pure black. The patches need to be rougher and thinner. Nose color is #1e1616. 01:03, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the colours, Patch. I redid the whole thing.

Expand, define, and smooth out the shading. For the shading use a dark tint, like blue or red. Then run the blur tool or smudge tool over it to make it look pretty. You can also go to Filters>Blur>Gaussian Blur, the best way to get the shading looking smooth. Smudge the patches a lot more in the direction of the fur as well. 21:42, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll blur the shading and I'll define the ear depth and eye depth.

Reuploaded. What about now?

Better. However, please expand the shading more, and define it. Her patches are lighter, sharper, and smaller. 22:12, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Some more patches should be added as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:34, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Thriftpaw (A) - For Evaluation
Didn't know what her eye color was, so I just guessed. Hope that's ok? --Pondleaf (talk) 12:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try, but first of all your heading is actually incorrect as it needs either for approval or for Evaluation. I can't find you on the projects table so idk if this should be approval or evaluation but if needed someone can fix it. Second, your file names incorrect, we've got a file naming format! It should be File:Thriftpaw.apprentice.png rather than what you have. Also, could you define all the shading? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:35, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I've also added you to the reservation table. Make sure to claim the image you want and date it before posting another artwork to the approval page! 13:00, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 13:02, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

You need to match her kit, i still have the file if you need it. 13:43, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Okay, can I have the file then? --Pondleaf (talk) 07:02, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, do you have an email or discord I can send it to? 21:11, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Cloud (Storm) (Alt. E)- For Approval
Comments? I might need to smooth out the shading, I'll do that tomorrow. 02:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

there's a bit of waste behind the head

next to the ear too actually. also there appears to be shading leaking around the haunch/underbelly area.

The shading should be smoothed too and it wouldn't hurt tk add a tad more depth. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

define light more on the front paws please. --

06:39, 4/17/2019

Reuploaded  23:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the front leg. smooth out the shading on the haunch and add depth everywhere

can you also define the shading on the ear? <span style="">02:40 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded  21:42, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

smudge the pelt into the earpink and the shading is still really blotchy. Also, most of the shading suggests that the light is coming from over the back, but the face and the placement of the light in the eye suggests that it's coming from the front 06:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste next to the ear

Reuploaded tried with the shading depth, how does this look? 21:38, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, rump and the space between the belly and tail I think. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded should be gone now! 02:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading --

16:02, 4/20/2019

Reuploaded how is dis, Silver? 17:02, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste by the tail, legs and head! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  01:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste-free! 02:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. 03:19, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded how's this? 03:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it on the legs and flank, and define it on the face? 13:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice also defined the tail's light. There is already shading on the face, it's below the ear closest to us. 15:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Frondwhisker (W) - For Approval
Shading looks horrendous but I guess we'll see. The colors are taken from the apprentice.

19:42, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the back foot. Also smooth out the shading a little? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:33, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. 22:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:31, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice stripes seem thicker, could you thicken them? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:35, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:45, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the facial shading some? <span style="">02:42 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded

03:12, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the pale parts rougher and make the pale marks over her eyes more pointy? Her tail also needs some pale. She needs some more stripes on the leg closest to us and on her chest, to match what i had on the kit. Could you maybe make the texture rougher too? it looks a bit too soft (i used the pencil tool to make it) the stripes on the face could be rougher too. the stripes on the forehead are also more like a half circle on the bottom, then two other halves of a circle on the edges. I have no idea if that makes sense so if you need me to explain further or a redline for that let me know. 03:50, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you? It'd be easier for me that way.

03:59, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

sort of like half a circle with an "M" she also needs three little dots below her eyes. here's her kit with just the stripes, as a reference for her leg and face stripes, if that helps. 04:15, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

23:34, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The texture is very pencil-ey and hard edged. Could you soften it?

Reuploaded

21:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the hind leg? And I think the black on her nose should be expanded to touch the lines of her nose if I'm not mistaken. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  12:41, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:38, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Flamepelt (Alt E) - For Approval
so dumbass me goofed and used the longhaired lineart.... I'm gonna go and fix that. ​​​​​​​

Re-uploaded. Looked better long-furred. ​​​​​​​

this is cute. can you define the body shading a slight bit? <span style="">02:43 Thu Apr 18

Re-uploaded. I just redid the shading, and tweaked the coloring a bit... not sure I like it. ​​​​

Can you expand the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:25, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Where? I could see the face, but I feel the main body and tail are good for now. ​​​​

I feel the haunch could be expanded just a bit. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:30, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ​​​​

Could you define the shading depth on the belly?

Re-uploaded.

Troutclaw (E) - For Approval
I wanted a challenge! .. and anime hair. im only in it for thE HAIR. I referenced and colorpicked the star. i dont think i matched the stripes very great tho?? but if you have suggesstions on that please do ill probably fiddle with those tomorrow. i sure got that challenge. i think i can have this and flutterkit bc this is a redo? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 02:07, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! The stripes appear a tad sharper/rugged on the star. Maybe try using a very small eraser and stroke horizontally on the edges? 12:17, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) ~ CBA
eh

Darken the base a tad? She looks white. 13:03, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

I matched the other images though, so idk what I can do about it. I think it looks plenty gray to me

She looks white to me too, did you take her colors from her apprentice? Her apprentice pixel looks white to me as well, only her queen is gray in my eyes. I guess it just depends on the person? <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:12, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

I took the colors from the old elder

I colorpicked the colors off her other images, and what I got for this: f2f2f2. On the apprentice, I got eaeaea. On the queen, I got d5d5d4. The bases don't match.. 00:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

It appears that the other images were tweaked to be lightened but that doesn't appear to be the case for the queen? I'm confused, which one should I match?

Since majority of her set is lightened, i feel as if the queen should be also lightened. -- 03:09, 4/19/2019

But wouldn't it make sense to have the rest darkened, since she's supposed to be pale gray? I don't know lol <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  12:55, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

I mean.. she's described as "very pale gray" which to me, seems like an offwhite/near white

Meh I might be the odd one out but I feel like the queen most accurately reflects 'very pale gray', and we should have the app tweaked. But, it's not really that big of a deal; tbh you could pick since it's fairly close either way.

Re-uploaded matched the queen

Smooth the shading on the middle section a little, if possible :D 08:52 Sat Apr 20 2019

Re-uploaded

Hm could you darken the shading just half a tick?

Re-uploaded

CBA?

Lightleap (A) ~ CBA
13:57, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a touch more shading depth at the base of the chest?

Re-uploaded. 02:22, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Bellaleaf (Q) ~ For Approval
-- 14:49, 4/18/2019

Tail is wrong. Fixing it. -- 14:50, 4/18/2019

Reups -- 15:07, 4/18/2019

She has more tabby stripes per the KP, can you add some more since they show the same side. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:27, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Ferk helped me with the redline. -- 03:07, 4/19/2019

Could you define the light on the ears. There's also shading leaking onto her back from the the ears. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:05, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe give the stripes a slight smudge or maybe a blur? They look a little sharper than her other images - this is gorgeous Silv! 08:51 Sat Apr 20 2019

Reups Thank you max! -- 09:21, 4/20/2019

Smooth the tail shading some? Also, given the source, I believe there'd be less shading on the top of the head

Shadowpaw (MCA) ~ CBA
OH BOy here we go folks. I was asked to match this instead of the old kit blank by the OA, so in case anything doesn't match the old blank, that's why. I'm gonna go crawl away now. 22:16, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

His eyes need to be amber, they look gray. Define the shading on all the legs. 22:22, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

They seem amber to me imo <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:37, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

they look yellow to me, i think making them slightly more orange wont hurt 13:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 14:57, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Updated a few things. 18:25, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Dawncloud (E) ~ For Approval
redid this, because I could not make heads or tails of how to even begin tweaking it

CBA?

Sorry to break CBA, could you actually expand the shading on the haunch? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:06, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm gonna reupload this later but will do.

Nectarsong (W) ~ For Approval
tried my best with the texture on this one ....;w; Tybaxel (talk) 00:40, April 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I could be wrong but I feel like she's a little cross-eyed? Her right eye seems to be pointing a little too much to the left. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:30, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think Lightleap had similar eyes, could be ok? Malina457 (talk) 02:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)malina

I agree with the eyes, they look cross-eyed. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:05, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Tybaxel (talk) 03:25, April 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded fixed a shading error Tybaxel (talk) 15:47, April 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Heyo, I'm the person with the master pattern of Nectarsong, and I bring tips! For the texture, I had 3 layers. The first one is the base color on multiply (hex code is #825714), and I used a 1px airbrush and swiped in the direction of the fur. The second layer is the first layer copied. And the third layer is the base color on multiply with the opacity at 43.1%. For that, I used a 1px paintbrush and swiped in the direction of the fur. I use GIMP, and I can always send you the file if needed. Hope this helped. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <17:42, 4/19/2019> ​

ty for your input!! i used four layers on mine and i think i did well enough recreating the texture! i’ll see if others have to say anything though Tybaxel (talk) 19:44, April 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The texture should be a bit sharper/more visible underneath the shading^^ It's recreated pretty closely, for one going without a file - but you could probably grab that from Star or just adjust it slightly yourself.

Nightsky (TBC) (W) - For Approval
meh... 06:14, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a tad and smooth the egdes. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:04, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:09, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

could you define a little bit of depth on the chest area? more towards the chin and such, if that makes sense 20:58 Sat Apr 20 2019

Re-uploaded 05:53, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Rain (E) ~ For Approval
I forgot how i did his toeh lol -- 07:55, 4/19/2019

Define the shading on the legs and tail a bit more? 14:58, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reups -- 16:43, 4/19/2019

With your light source, the belly shading should be on the <-- side not the -->. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:08, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

reups -- 09:25, 4/20/2019

Can you smooth the shading on the back and belly?

Jasper (KP) - CBA
That is a metal collar btw I forgot I never posted this <span style="">15:03 Fri Apr 19

Define the light on the tongue and shading on the collar. Also with this source, add shading to the shoulder (Moss's source). Define the shading on the ears. 15:29, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shadin on the haunch and belly <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:08, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">20:38 Sat Apr 20

CBA? 20:13, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Quailfeather (TBC) (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 16:17, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Baby! Maybe smooth out the tail shading on ^ side of the tail? I love this Malina457 (talk) 17:20, April 19, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded. Thanks. 17:59, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the front legs a touch?

Reuploaded. 23:11, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could youj smooth the haunch shading near the top? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:09, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) ~ For Approval
Comments? 16:17, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart just slightly on the tummy^^

Reuploaded. 23:11, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading, it seems to rough especially for the transition from the light to the shading. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Mousefur (E) - CBA
I wanted a challenge and boy did I get one. I'm not satisfied with the pelt, I think she should have more lighter areas. I'll see what I can do. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:08, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined some shading <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  03:01, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ear closest to us? 05:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

It should be fine since from what I see it matches her other images. Expand the stomach and front body shading please. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:15, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Stomach shading is plenty fine, in my opinion, and I think maybe only add some more shading to that front leg closest to us. 08:46 Sat Apr 20 2019

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11   Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  13:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt. E) - For Approval
smoosh floof. also I know it doesn't match the DF, but I have that up for tweak nom to darken it. I can match it for now if I need to just lmk <span style="">20:22, 04/20/2019

Are you matching Scarlet's lineart? I can't tell. Define the earpink a tad? 21:45, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Uh I don't have to match lineart. Reuploaded. <span style="">22:13, 04/20/2019

Uh from what I know you have to match lineart. I was made to match Burnt's Slash lineart. It should match Scarlet's. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:58, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I was told I did not have to match the line art. I spoke to multiple leads about it. There are a few other lineart tweaks that do not match between regular and alt as well; Brokenstar’s dark forests, Thistleclaw’s dark forests are two examples. <span style="">03:36, 04/21/2019

I think it's fine. -- 04:16, 4/21/2019

I was told before I withdrew Poppydawn's alt by Jayce I had to match Scarlet's lineart for Poppydawn's elder above since she posted it first. Scarlet posted Brokenstar's elder first, so you should probably match hers, Ferk. 15:39, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

If they spoke to the leads about it, and they were fine, this is fine Malina457 (talk) 16:10, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

It is indeed fine as is. If you would - could you define the shading depth on the front leg closest to us?

Kitepaw (A) - For Approval
take two; sorry about last night, my brain was fried from work 20:47 Sat Apr 20 2019

Could you lighten the shading a bit? seems a bit dark -- 04:17, 4/21/2019

reuploaded these monitors will be the death of me 06:12 Sun Apr 21 2019

Loudbelly (E) - For Approval
i love his name honestly 22:14 Sat Apr 20 2019

Completely optional, but perhaps soften the darker eye depth a touch? 22:30, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded just rearranged it a little nicer, hope that works? 22:40 Sat Apr 20 2019

Lark (CG) - For Approval
David was OA of the kit and mentioned that they wanted her to be a grey tabby since we nuked the rule so here she is<3 <span style="">22:45, 04/20/2019

Maybe make her a little closer to pale? I love this pattern ^^ Malina457 (talk) 23:32, April 20, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Actually, she is mentioned to look like her father, so she needs to be a dark gray tabby. 02:09, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Her description is "pale tabby" I disagree Malina457 (talk) 03:02, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

She shoukd be a pale tabby but I thinm what the meams by her looking like her father would be tabby design but from what I remember Stormfur was never a tabby? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:10, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like does not mean totally the same, unlike Hoot Jumper and Barley. She might just carry genetics like her father, pale gray is okay. -- 04:12, 4/21/2019

Since she's a pale tabby honestly she could be made lighter

Havenpelt (Q) - For Approval
Honestly I'm not really happy with this. Tinystream (talk) 23:05, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing the image? Could reup it? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:47, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Darken shading and define the light <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:48, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reup I may have to redo the white. Tinystream (talk) 01:28, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the light on the forepaws, they're looking quite grey at the moment

Rain (Alt.E) ~ For Approval
I have no idea of the light source so if I need to fix it, please be specific of where exactly to adjust/add shading.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, there shouldn't be any shading on the back. See Cloud (my art). She has a similar source to this. 02:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Actually from the way it seems, there shohld be back shading as it looks as though its coming from the --> <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:09, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Yes it's meant to be coming from top -> so I think a little bit of back shading is needed.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:26, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Quick Water (Star) ~ For Approval
unpopular opinion: i still like her

Unpopular opinion: I still like her too. Define the light on the paw farthest from us. 02:11, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Can you define the shading? Maybe somehow, make the white on the belly more white? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:35, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded can't do anything about the white bc if I remove the shading it'll contradict with my light source

The sahding on the belly looks lighter than the rest of the shading. --

04:15, 4/21/2019

I mean of course it'd look lighter. It's the same color on white. I'm not sure what i'm supposed to do about it

whenever I'm having issues with gray-looking white I just remove the shading and add a new layer for only the white with a more acceptable white tint, like dark blue. Also, I sometimes overlay another layer of bright white to brighten it up some. I'm not saying you have to, but I do agree that it looks gray and I had to do quite a few reuploads for Bess's kittypet because of the same thing <span style="">18:40 Sun Apr 21

Duskwater (E) ~ For Approval
Wow I actually like this -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  01:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The top of the head should have shading/depth shading I think, since it looks like the light is coming from below. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Smallear (E) - For Approval
I love his ears. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dappletuft (W) - For Approval
nice <span style="">04:25 Sun Apr 21

Either remove or lessen the shading on the tail tip. it looks like a flat object with the tail tip being covered entirely

reuploaded <span style="">17:47 Sun Apr 21

Featherpelt (Q) ~ For Approval
ugh i suck at matching tabby patterns

^ colour picked from the apprentice, tried to match that and the kit but none of her images seem to show this side well enough, hope it's okay? :/

Cat with rose-tipped paws - for approval
wanna hear a joke? <== 11:06, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Sure lol, mayhaps smooth the tail shading? Malina457 (talk) 16:08, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

I feel like you should perhaps make the rose-tips more orangey/creamey? That pink looks a little unrealistic imo. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

I mean its told as being a rose tipped and normally rose symbolizes a pink/off red. Not to mention, the description itself isnt really realistic. Why does it have to be realistic now? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:41, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste by both paws. <font face="Segoe Print"> G o  p  h  e  r  p  a  w  19:11, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Purdy (e) ~ For Approval
my hands are very tired 15:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

this may just be me but i think the gray on the face would look better if you smoothed it a little more? like blend it a little more into the brown Tybaxel (talk) 16:03, April 21, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Reuploaded 16:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think that cream fur on the back should be there, since it's meant to be exposed skin right? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:31, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Breeze That Rustles the Leaves (ki) - For Approval
All colors from the TB.