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Ratscar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
All I did was add the torn ear and scar, of which came from the warrior. OA was Silver. Comments?  11:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and make it more pinkish? It looks gray right now. 15:36, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:53, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to complain about something that you just fixed, but could you redden the earpink? It looks too pale to me.... but the rest of this image is positively beautiful, really! :) 00:01, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

If it gets anymore red then it will be hard to see against the base coat. I think it's fine. 03:24 Thu Jul 5

Re-uploaded Thickened the scar...I thought it didn't match the warrior's very well o3o  11:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken it a bit more? :3 03:30, 06, 07, 2012

Enlarge the earpink and possibly make it the same color as the scar? 22:44, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? 04:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, re-uploaded 04:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the tear on his ear match the warrior. 16:42, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to darken shading, define earpink, and blur facewhite. OA was some crazy person. 23:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and define the shading. 23:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:47, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white on the muzzle some more. 18:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hate the shading with a firey passion. I miss GIMP :( 21:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights(?) and the shading looks flat, try defining it more. 22:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading since they seem blotchy. 00:47 Mon Jul 9

Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her front leg. 19:34, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach and haunch shading. There's also a strip of shading on the back - blur that, or remove it, since the light source is coming from there. 14:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing yet. 06:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Foxleap (Ki) - Redone
Arg. *has seem to lost all tabby skill* I tried to match the warrior the best I could x-x OA was Brightfrost with a redo by me awhile ago. Comments? 14:33, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and maybe lighten the pelt just a bit. 14:36, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:49, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 15:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''This pelt color makes it hard to blur earpink, and keep it noticeable. e.e 15:10, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a little bit more. Try to make it match the warrior. 15:23, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The shading was making the pelt color dark, I'm guessing. I color picked all the colors of the warrior. I ligthened the base up a lot. 18:46, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and define the shading on this > part of the body. 00:52, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Adorable <3 But I think the hue for the pelt is wrong, it looks a bit too pink to me. 02:25, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 02:36, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.... and then you might want to lighten the pelt color a tiny bit. oue 06:57, 09, 07, 2012 Reuploaded. I darkened the shading, but Loonie and Roo on Skype said I didn't need to lighten the pelt. Roo said it just looks darker because of the warrior's highlights, and I don't use highlights. 21:27, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Braveheart (W) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike. Just ran the color replacement tool over it to lighten the shade of brown and then redid the ear-pink to match. 04:14, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Not mine Scar, Leafstrike's. xD I was just fixing the paw lineart. Do you think you could try and get rid of the little specks the look like mottles while this is up? 09:25, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? 15:07, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

It still looks dark to me. Lighten it some more? Breeze whisker  22:40, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:52, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) - Tweaked
Defined the scar, along with a few minorly minor changes. :3 OA's were Evanphoto (I think), minor tweak by Bramble, Cloudy and Rainfacestar. Comments? 07:10, 09, 07, 2012

Could you sharpen the scar a tad? It'll make it more realistic. 18:16, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  o3o I forgot that tool existed changes might not be showing. 06:24, 10, 07, 2012

Hazeltail (Ki) - Tweaked
Ew... Made the facial marking not go over her eye. OA I think was Rainwhisper. Comments? o.e 07:53, 09, 07, 2012

Can you define the shading while your at it? Skt Omnia vincit amor  02:27, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  06:37, 10, 07, 2012

Leopardfoot (Q) ~ Redone
OA was the wonderful Cloudy. She needed mottles. I made her a dark tortie because it seemed to match her description the best. But I'm open for ideas (it was either this or a Savannah cat) Comments? 08:52 Mon Jul 9

I see some waste around the ear and back. 08:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 09:01 Mon Jul 9

She's not described as a dark tortie though. She's described as a black mottled cat. Now the only ones of those I've seen are black leopards, so I suggest reffing one of those, but if you can find a normal cat that's mottled black, feel free. But I don't think we should bend the description that much... 09:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bleh I tried x.x 10:06 Mon Jul 9

Make them slightly less uniform? 10:28, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *destroys* 10:52 Mon Jul 9

The mottles still look orange. Maybe tint them so they're a little more grey/black? 16:41, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, she's pretty much spot-on (hehe), that's how black leopards, and also black tabbies, look in the sunlight. Breeze whisker  18:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Her eyes look really blue. 21:13, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

They're green, I went off the picture of the black leopards. They're fine. 21:14 Mon Jul 9

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanfur (W) - Redone
Redone for shading, and the tabby markings didn't go all the way. You guys said you like the markings on the old one, so I tried to make the stripes sort of blur together as the coat got longer. I don't think I did it quite right. .-. Breeze  whisker  17:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

As always, you never fail to amaze, Breeze. However, the shading at the bottom of the tail could use some lightening to benefit the picture, and the back shading overall could be lightened. 17:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The back shading seems fine. It shows lots of depth like this... 17:57, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. <3 Breeze  whisker  18:52, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't be mad, and since this is just a suggestion you can choose not to, but this doesn't really look like the old pattern at all and we all expressed interest in keeping it. Is there any possibility of you doing that? 20:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm inclined to agree with Ivy.. I quite liked the older pattern, and there really wasn't much wrong with the older style. I respect the choice if you want to keep it how it is, though. ^^;;

Define the eye values. 21:14, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, how? Do you want me to get rid of more stripes? .-. Or if you're talking about it being long haired, I did that so that the fading stripes would make more sense. Breeze whisker  03:56, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, basically make him a pointed tabby like before. 04:28, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. I'd rather not. I'll blend a few more stripes together and stuff, but I'd rather not make him an actual tabby point. Breeze whisker  18:24, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

That was one of the conditions when this was nominated, Breeze. We asked that you keep the pattern the same.

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (W) ~ Tweaked
Cloudy sent me the .psd for this so this is technically tweaked. I just added the pattern but the shading and highlight and earpink are the same, just recolored. Comments? 20:09 Mon Jul 9

Define the earpink. 21:02, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:09 Mon Jul 9

Flick (Ro) ~ Tweaked
OA was Storm, and the entire image was basically highlights. Shading needed defining and blurring, highlights needed to be dulled, ect. It may look redone, but it's not. The blur tool is my best friend. <3

Rowanfur (KP) - Redone
WOOHOO I FAIL. Same as the warrior^ OA was Ashshadow. 21:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it's not that dark on the warrior. And kill the waste. And shush, you don't fail. This is /wonderful/, as always. 21:05, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. x.x 21:12, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the lighter part on his foreleg? And Loon. >:| What'd I say I'd do if you didn't admit it was awesome? I'd call you a liar and slap you with the frozen butterfingerz (Then proceed to let you keep it but...)  23:35, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:34, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail_(WC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Shading needed to be redone, plus I darkened her to match the apprentice. Most recent OA was Iceheart. 17:03, July 10, 2012 (UTC)\

O.O You made a new file. Enlarge the earpink on <-- That side. 17:04, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the file name, even if the image isn't showing >_>. Also just did the earpink. 17:09, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (A) - Tweaked
OA was some epical Guildmaster. Added mottles 18:27, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and make it match her warrior? 20:18, July 10, 2012 (UTC)