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Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Approval
Haven't been here for a while! :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png) 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3  Crystie  Can't help loving me  01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left.

Reuploaded~ :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears? 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:29, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Blend the texture in the shading more. Flip the shading on < this ear to the other side, to comply with your light source. Can you also smooth out the shading as well? To soften it up and make it more of a gradient. 02:38, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  04:15, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 15:37, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

This might be a repeat of the comment above, but maybe define the shading placement? Especially on the flank, upper shoulder and chest area. Right now it looks like it's all over the place atm. 00:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, tail, and front legs. The shading on the back also appears to be leaking, and the shading, over all, could be smoothed. 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Much better! Swap the shading on the bend of the tail to the top to comply with your source. 00:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded like this? :P <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:17, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Not quite, Crystal. Not only would the shading be on top of that bend, that whole bend of the tail area would be in shadow. Can you also define the eye depth more? 23:00, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now? :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste along the back, underneath the tail, and underneath the paws. Could you define the light (remove some of the shading) on the tail? Seems to be covered in just shading. 15:31, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:40, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Here is a redline of what you shading should look like on the tail. Red is where it all has to be in shadow, and orange is where the light needs to be definned. 00:51, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:52, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

The light on the tail could still be defined a bit more in the area potato mentioned. It should be the same color as the lighted parts on the main body. 16:32, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:30, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth out the tail shading some? this is cute! <span style="">16:53 Fri Jun 28

try and remove the waste floating around the image^^

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  03:23, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light again on >>> this side of the tail, and it's leaking a bit there too. 16:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  10:45, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think there's shading leakage along the back? 00:50, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

I see waste under the tail, and the light should be define on the tail again. 01:10, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  01:37, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste around the image and define the light on the tail some more, try erasing the shading there on all your layers or add a highlight to help define it. 02:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  06:04, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

there is waste all around the back of the body and lots of waste around the feet. The shading on the back is slightly leaking too 13:24, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  04:11, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shade in by the tail fold please--<span style="color: #00BFFF;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: #000000; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #A827FE;">willowstep 14:14, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more facial shading to <--- side of the face? 19:15, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:59, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, there would be light on the stomach. 01:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  01:53, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome work, you've improved a ton, Crystal! I've moved you up to an apprentice on the table^^ it might just be me, but there appears to be some shading leaking on the back. 14:00, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I also see leaking shading on the back (could also be bounce light). 14:02, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

(Also gonna bump this up to "for approval" since you're getting the hang of things. You can use this heading for all future submissions from now on ^^ Also, you're almost there!) 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh TYSM guys!! I'll reupload it soon <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  01:27, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  01:58, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the bottom of the chest, near the legs? 02:34, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

smotth out the shading on the shoulder and back area connecting to the shoulder. Also i think theres is shading leaking where the back and the tail meet 10:51, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  09:36, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like there's some shading leaking on the front leg from the chest and a little on the haunch. 18:59, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  00:59, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

There's a halo of waste around the image - could you remove that?

Reuploaded Yep! :P <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  00:41, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

There is still waste around the image, such as behind the shoulder, underneath the front paws, and along the ---> front leg. 16:37, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading?

Eaglekit (WC) (K) ~ CBA
03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and maybe reduce some of the shading on the shoulder? 04:14, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the shading could be lightened slightly as well <span style="">21:00 Mon Jul 1

With this source, there would be shading on the jaw that connects to the neck shading. 21:24, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I get the sense I'll be battling shading a lot with this image... 03:08, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the haunch and should be smoothed out more. 03:46, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail and arm. 16:48, July 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:23, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking in the shoulder area, and define the shading on the ears. 03:02, July 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I may or may not have gotten the leaking shading 16:23, July 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit? 18:45, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA 05:35, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

So sorry to break CBA, but, the shading is leaking away on the belly, and the depth on the head could be defined too (as it looks comparatively lighter than other darker areas)

Define the shading depth on the front leg and add some shading to the ear farthest from us and the barely visible front paw. The shading could also be smoothed out a bit more. 22:18, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was so close... 02:17, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Derfine the jaw/face shading, define the light on the front leg, and define the shading on the front paw farthest from us. Shading is still leaking in the belly area. Smooth out the shading on the tail. 02:23, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:30, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

There is still shading leaking away from the lineart on that patch of belly/midsection where it meets the tail, and I also think the light on the visible front paw and lower leg could be defined

Reuploaded 19:46, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the <--- ear? 16:52, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also fixed some minor issues about shading/eye color from Spooky and Vec 19:40, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the tail? 01:27, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:23, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 17:23, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) ~ CBA
original shading was a nightmare but i quite like this new look. ​ There's a block of waste at <-- end of the tail. And maybe add some shading on the rest of the back near the shoulder? 23:47, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading tint a bit? And add just a little more where the haunch meets the tail? 23:49, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

re-up

CBA 19:22, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading could be smoothed out.

re-up

Could you lighten the shading over the < eye and perhaps put the eye white on top? The current shading drowns out the color

re-up i thought i said this but whoops

Re-CBA? 17:22, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (Ro) - For Approval
Won't be able to reupload Mon-Fri because I'm going camping. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 15:23, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker and softer, looking at her deputy and loner. 15:25, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Expand the shading on the tail and the foreleg furthest from us. 21:04, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body and haunch area, bit sharp there. The shading everywhere else though looks fine. You're doing a great job so far! 21:58, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste beside the hind leg closest to us. <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  01:43, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah sorry, should be reuploaded by tomorrow. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:36, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Fallowsong (W) - For Approval
19:29, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Might just be my eyes, but I think the base is slightly duller on the other images. Mind color picking again? And the shading could be smoothed on the haunch. 20:54, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:57, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and define the depth everywhere. You could try using a couple of other images that have already been approved for an example on how smooth it should be, if that helps. Her eyes need to be brighter. They look almost like a pale green here while on her other images they look golden. 14:49, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded instant depth! 22:13, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think it could be smoothed out more

Reuploaded boom  21:28, July 9, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed some more. 15:52, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:08, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth it out more. If you've gotten many comments repeating to smooth it, I'd suggest smoothing it out a lot more than you have been, at least just on the outer edges of the shading. 14:38, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This shading hates me. 22:42, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth it out a tad more on the legs, face, and neck. 16:54, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:23, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch, neck, and face shading some more, particularly the areas where you applied depth. 22:06, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:51, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall, it's looking a bit blotchy. ​​

Reuploaded shading is the end of me  04:16, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading a bit more on the haunch and on the left shoulder (our left)? 13:19, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 16:40, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and shoulder some more. 17:24, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Tried to match the original lineart

15:01, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading transition on the tail? 15:50, July 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you soften the dapples a little, and maybe add more per the original warrior?

can you define the shading on -> side of the body? <span style="">06:39 Thu Jul 11

Reuploaded

15:33, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth everywhere just a bit? Excluding the tail, and can you make the shading appear a bit smoother on the tail? It seems to end abruptly. 14:42, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (Alt. K) - For Approval
This was so fun to make! 23:06, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 03:26, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also darkened the shading a small bit. 03:38, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Minor, there's waste in front of the muzzle. 16:47, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

can you add a little more shading along the haunch? <span style="">17:48 Fri Jul 12

Reuploaded  21:23, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the shading on the tail and haunch and define the depth everywhere. 14:43, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:54, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 22:04, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:51, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

some leaking shading on the haunch

Reuploaded  03:48, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the tail shading and smooth it out. ​​

Reuploaded  04:16, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Shading’s leaking away from the lineart on the arm where it goes along the tail

Reuploaded -- 16:40, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shoulder and ear fluff shading a bit. And there's a tiny bit of shading leaking away from the lineart along > portion of the tail. 17:25, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Alt. W) - For Approval
Probably one of the last images before the major break. 23:37, July 11, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading and add some to the belly/chest area <span style="">01:18 Fri Jul 12

Reuploaded There was shading already there, but I defined it. I hope this looks better! 01:40, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading slightly and smooth it out on the haunch. 03:25, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded There, definitely visible now. 03:38, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

The haunch shading could still be smoothened out 14:14, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:24, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch more, define the depth on the tail, ears, and lower part of the chest between the legs, and expand the shading on the front leg furthest away. I'm not sure if it's just me, but the shading looks kind of flat. I don't know if you could add some more depth to it? 14:46, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, upon looking again, the shading looks fine and I think if you define the depth in the areas I suggested, that will fix the flatness I'm seeing. 14:48, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:54, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out haunch and stomach shading. 22:05, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:51, July 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the overall shading a fair bit more. ​​

Reuploaded  04:16, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out a little bit overall, but especially on the haunch and the muzzle. I also think the shading might be leaking a little bit at the base of the chest. 13:25, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 16:40, July 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and shoulder a bit, and there's shading leaking away from the lineart on the haunch and shoulder. 17:26, July 15, 2019 (UTC)