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Snowbird (K) - For Approval
First character ever!! (I'm so proud of myself) Echorunner (talk) 12:50, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, I did it for you. This is amazing! :) maybe blur the shading more? There needs to be nose pink as well. This is very good for your first charart The Fox Girl (talk) 12:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

If you are a kit, it should say "For evaluation" instead of "For Approval"- Anyway, please define the shading on the tail and the legs, but great work! :) Burntclaw (talk) 12:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think you can define it everywhere. 13:00 Fri Nov 28

Plus, this should be called File:Snowbird.kit.png. I also fixed the thumbnail. 13:06 Fri Nov 28

Thanks! I'll remember next time!!!!

Remember to sign your posts with four "~"s, also, when ever you re-upload something, remember to notify us by writing something like Re-ups. XD Btw add shading to the legs plz. If you need help with the placement of the shading you can look at the apprentice tutorials. Also, the file is still not named correctly. Burntclaw (talk) 14:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

To rename it, just rename it in the next upload The Fox Girl (talk) 14:26, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, it makes less work for admins (maybe) if you wait and have an admin rename it for you. 14:54, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please, it's much easier to just let me rename it. Which I just have. I'm also gonna change the heading to "For Approval" since I think this is good for an apprentice-rank promotion tbh.

Along with defining the shading on the legs and tail, maybe add another layer of shading on top of the existing one at a lower opacity ro create some depth? 21:07, 11/28/2014

Blur the earpink a bit? The Fox Girl (talk) 07:12, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It looks plenty blurred enough to me. 21:36, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink, actually? 03:47, 11/30/2014

Sharpen the shading a bit, it looks flat. Burntclaw (talk) 00:15, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Just a friendly reminder: please remember to re-upload your image by Friday(Dec. 5th) or it may be declined. Since when you don't upload for seven days it is considered lack of work. (Yes I know this is a leads' job, but nobody had said anything so...please don't be mad at me). 19:26, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

She actually did, she just forgot to reup Burntclaw (talk) 02:45, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs, also define the shading on the tail. The Fox Girl (talk) 05:02, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Well I'm now just seeing changes so I don't believe she already did before I posted that message. Unless wikia is broken again. But if forgetting to say reup is the case, she could still get her image declined if we don't know what we're looking at. That's just the way the boat floats, and I'm just trying to warn her ahead of time before she has to experience that. Back to the image, define the facial shading and define the depth of the body shading. This is looking really good! 14:07, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, please. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:12, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

The white is looking a tad bit gray, maybe give the shading a dark blue tint to help it? I know tint isn't required but it would help. 00:37, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Echorunner, please remember to say "Re-uploaded" or "Re-ups" so we know you've uploaded a new version of your image. Thank you. 13:46, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

This was last reuploaded on the 7th, as shown by the file history. It doesn't take much of anything to look at the history and see, honestly. Just to be sure, you're still working, right, Echorunner? I haven't seen you comment on this section in a while, so I just want to double-check.

Oh, i forgot about this! My computer wasn't letting me comment on a lot of stuff on wiki and youtube... thats why and yes, i am still working on it (and my practice characters)--Echorunner (talk) 00:37, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define light on the tail. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:38, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Brightflower (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried out Jayie's shading style which I love <3. I adore her cute lil' muzzle. The eyes are larger because in her description it states that she has "wide-set amber eyes" so I just wanted to add emphasis on that. Colour & design taken from the warrior & queen pixels. all the kittens    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:51, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Forgot the pale paws. ._.    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:59, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I fixed the alignment for you^^ Also, define the stripes a bit, as they're more pronounced on her other images. And define the shading & shading depth. This is pretty =) 13:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the eyes are normal on the other images, and you //need// to match that, so make them normal size please. And define the shading. 13:53, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you Frosty for fixing the alignment! I've defined the stripes, shrunk the eyes, shading & shading depth. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:05, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? 03:45, 11/30/2014

can you blur and maybe thicken the shading everywhere not on the head? 03:49, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? I kinda can't see them. This is really cute, though.

Re-uploaded - Thank you! All change have been added, although having some trouble with the stripes. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is making her looks pretty green in those areas. Try tinting it a dark red? 00:34, 12/2/2014

The only place she "looks green" is probably the paws. Everywhere else looks fine to me, imho. Again, as I've said before, tinting shading is not mandatory, Ruefrost, so please do not think you're under any obligation to do so- you can do whatever you're comfortable with doing.

Lighten the shading, I can't see the pattern through it. It could also be expanded a bit, 'cause she's looking a tad bit flat. 15:30, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened the shading, defined the pattern, tweaked the muzzle slightly & define the shading (kinda..)   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:38, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? The shading still looks green on the paws. The Fox Girl (talk) 03:08, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. The Fox Girl (talk) 06:21, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 14:22, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the paws? It looks.. blotchy, for lack of a better word? If you think its fine, feel free to ignore me. :)-- 20:50, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Completed all of the above. Defined the leg/foot shading to make it darker and more noticeable. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:58, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten your shading I can't see the pattern through it. And I personally think that the black shading is throwing the color off a bit. I strongly recommend you tint your shading. But if you wish not to, I will not longer speak of it. 21:02, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Um, did I not say before don't say to tint the shading if they haven't already? It's already been mentioned multiple times, and if she would have wanted to, she'd have done it before now. Seriously, please stop asking. This goes for everyone. I think the black shading looks fine. You can use black on anything and it'll look just fine- I rarely ever tint my shading and most of mine is actually pure black. =/

Oh whoops I didn't know it had already been mention. :x I rarely tint mine either, it's 95% of the time black. But sometimes when it's a certain base color you have to accommodate so it doesn't look like it's clashing. Unless you put it on super super light and then you can't see it. Meh anyway sorry for repeating. But my comment still stands on lightening the shading^^ 03:45, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - It's fine Frosty don't stress. I probably should of told you (my bad).Thank you to for telling Snow. I've lightened the shading. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt Q 2) ~ For Approval
The shading is icky, so may I please have a redline? 20:50, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:20, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the facial shading and tail shading a bit? 22:05, 11/30/2014

Re-Uploaded 23:20, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changed shading into smudged shading. =) 23:39, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Upped 23:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Have the tail shading curve more with the shape of the tail. I like this a lot. =) 14:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the closest front and back legs, too, and add a few more flecks. Nicely done, Tiger, I don't think you need a redline for the shading ^_^  16:24, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I forgot to ask you to blur/smudge the belly shading a little. 21:33, 12/1/2014

Would you like the file to her queen, Tiger? 22:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks. ^-^ 00:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I think this may need a bit more flecks on the right side of the face? Either that or define them, because I can kind of see them, but Im not sure. 00:11, 12/2/2014

Lighten up the shading on the left front paw. Burntclaw (talk) 00:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:51, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Make the shading curve with the tail. 23:46, 12/2/2014

Re-upped 03:08, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Plz lighten up the shading on both front paws- they look like darker paws instead of shading. Burntclaw (talk) 11:38, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Please lighten up the shading a tad on the hind leg farthest from us, I honestly cannot see the stripes through it. 13:06, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading lot more, it looks hard edged. Especially on the tail. Burntclaw (talk) 10:04, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Add shading on the shoulder. There would be shadow there because of the head. 17:11, 12/5/2014

Re-uploaded Sorry for not re-uploading a lot, life got to me. 15:53, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

This is looking great! :) Lighten up the shading a liiiitttttllllleeeee bit on the head? Burntclaw (talk) 03:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define your light source? The back is telling me it's coming from the top, while the facial shading is telling me it's coming from the bottom right. Perhaps switch around the facial shading, or play with the body shading some? Idk, if this sounds confusing ignore me. ^^'-- 03:50, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:40, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Not sure if it's my screen, but are there white pixels on her back leg? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:10, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Begone white pixels! 00:26, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

More blank pixels were found 00:30, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:33, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Is it my imagining, or is there a gray line of waste above the image? 20:53, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 21:27 Mon Dec 8

Re-uploaded 02:17, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

There are flecks of waste all around the image right next to the lineart. Don't freak out yet. =3 03:41, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Hope I got rid of all that waste 03:24, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

I suggest you to listen up the shading everywhere and blur it. This is looking good! ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:37, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think the shading is fine. I can see the pattern through it, and it's not clashing with the pelt color. But if you think you agree with Burntclaw, Tigerbird, then you go right ahead. But I personally think it doesn't need to be touched. 03:45, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks like it's receeding on the stomach.

Re-upped 01:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Ashheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried Jayie's shading. All colors from the warrior image, which I'm the OA of. Comments? 21:57, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the chest? <span style="">22:22, 12/1/2014

Reuploaded. 22:33, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source and blur the shading a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the light source just fine, though I'll change it if others agree. As for the blurring, I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur or smudge her shading. 00:53, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading above the hind leg could be defined more <span style="">05:32, 12/2/2014

Reuploaded. Changes |here. I'll fix the waste next. 21:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on this <-- front paw. 03:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:35, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I honestly cannot tell where the light is coming from on this source. The head tells me it's coming from straight above, the chest tell me it's coming from the left, and the legs and side tell me it's coming from the right. 13:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to change the shading again unless it's either absolutely necessary or involves dulling the highlights. 13:33, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs and blur it everywhere else. 03:46, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just defined the shading, as I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur her shading. 16:06, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth out the shading somehow? I know it seems silly, but this looks a bit too abrupt, for lack of a better word? I'm sorry, I'm mobile and can't fully explain what I mean.

Reuploaded. I redid the whole shading. 21:12, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

define the face shading and maybe blur the right side chest shading, lookin good. 00:30, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 01:59, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth the shading out a little more? Maybe blur it or something, idk. 17:40, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:02, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Ki) - For Approval
02:22, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

SHe's cuuuuuute. Define the shading a bit on the legs?

Smudge the colors together more to match the other images. Burntclaw (talk) 04:52, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

She's adorable, Ducky! =) Define the tail shading some more. 14:00, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think the shading could be defined overall. <span style="">23:44, 12/2/2014

re-uploaded 15:45, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the image overall to match her other images, the color seems quite dark. Burntclaw (talk) 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

tbh, I think it looks fine. I think the white could be smudged a bit more. The Fox Girl (talk) 09:26, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Still working, Duck? Four days is ample enough time to ask imho.

Windflight (ki) ~ For Approval
all colors from starclanner. i tried man 21:19, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Lighten up the shading on the side? Not sure if it's just my screen, but I seems very dark. Burntclaw (talk) 02:37, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Just like Burntclaw said. Its amazing. I agree with him. The right side needs a lot more brightening up. NikiandCats (talk) 02:45, December 6 2014

Er... Niki I'm a girl. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 02:47, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

There's shading on the side; of course it'll look dark, so I think it's fine =p 03:06, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading is a bit too dark on the side, I'm sorry. :/ Plz don't get mad at me. Burntclaw (talk) 03:09, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

it's not even that dark, it's fine the stripes are easily visisble. 03:10, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

It could be lightened a bit, but mainly on the face.

re-up there u go 03:19, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? This is gorgeous, Beebs. <3 13:49, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 14:35, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to his other ear? It looks flat over there. Great as always, Beebs. =) 03:56, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

I've used this light source without complaint many times before, and there's no shading to that ear because it's in complete light. This can also be seen on stuff like Frostfur's kit, too. 04:11, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit more? It clashes a bit with the base.

re-up 22:33, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on <== this paw and on the neck? This looks nice! ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:21, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 20:26, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Alt Q) - For Approval
I tried to copy the placement on the queen. If Ivy would like this, they are more than welcome to come forward and I'll surrender it. ^^

Can you lighten the tabby stripes? Also, define the shading. --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:56, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Soften the texture some to match the other images more? <span style="">2:33 Sat Dec 6

Re-uploaded. --

Define the stripes on the front legs. <span style="">3:40 Sun Dec 7

Re-uploaded.

Eyes should be facing left 22:42, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Eye style is my choice- there's nothing wrong with it.

Define the tail shading a little more. This is gorgeous~you did a lovely job. 01:54, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried. Ivy's patterns are not an easy thing to match.

Define the shading just a litttle bit? I can barely see it, though it may just be my eyes ^^ <span style="">03:54, 12/11/2014

May I get a second opinion on that? It's not that I doubt you, Ferk, I'm just afraid to define the shading much, since it's already really off as it is, and I think I'm at risk of distorting the color (I tinted the shading a darker red). I'll gladly do it, though. I'd just like another user's opinion on it, since each monitor, phone, ect, shows a slightly different coloring.

I can see it..it's not as "up-in-your-face" as most other shading we see in PC, but the image is not flat. I can see the shading and I think if they defined it more it'd probably throw off the coloring a bit, and perhaps it would mask the stripes or something else that is prominent. So I think it's fine. Sorry Ferk, I trust your judgment a lot^^ 13:37, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reena (Ro) (K) ~ For Approval
You wouldn't believe how fast I finished this. I know the shading is icky. Thanks Burntclaw for the help on this image. :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:58, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Damnit the shading was leaking The Fox Girl (talk) 03:00, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaastteee I used my sister's account again... -_- The Fox Girl (talk) 03:54, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receeding from the lineart. Also, while your at it define the shading on the tabby parts, please. Well done, Fox =) 03:57, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

RE-UPS The Fox Girl (talk) 09:25, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

I believe the file name for this is supposed to be Reena (Ro).kit.png 19:48, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Hmmm.... Her rouge version is named Renna_rouge, I think. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:08, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay ^^. 00:23, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

No its name should be Reena_(Ro).kit.png and the rogue would most likely already be named Reena_(Ro).rogue.png...so yeah. .-. 16:39, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Tiger was right the first time she commented. It should be File:Reena (Ro).kit.png, and I'll rename it now. Not everyone knows that Reena is actually named after her aunt, and there are two of them. The _ in the file name really doesn't matter.

Define the shading more--on the pattern only. 14:16, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Not sure if changes are showing The Fox Girl (talk) 07:54, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Graystripe (Ki) ~ For Approval
comments? 18:40, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Add some stripe to the tail? And did you fill in the nose? <span style="">18:43 Sat Dec 6

Reups oopsie 19:05, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.

Reups 23:22, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Burntclaw (talk) 05:36, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, seen as she probably color-picked from his other images. <span style="">15:15 Sun Dec 7

Define the shading some more. He's adorable <3 20:56, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reups merci 18:35, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail? <span style="">18:38 Tue Dec 9

I think it looks fine^^ 03:38, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Jay's Wing (Ki) ~ For Approval
Can't make Stormcloud co-operate, so have this in the meantime 18:55, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some. They're more blurred than this on his Sharplaw and Softpaw images. <span style="">19:11 Sat Dec 6

reups 19:48, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten the body shading and smudge the ear pink a bit?

yes 17:07, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial and tail shading a bit. Gahh I wanted this XD you did such a lovely job with him though, much better than I could've ever done with him. =) 03:40, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

reups 16:27, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Palebird (Alt Q.) ~ For Approval
She looks like my own cat :) A question:Can i have a kit up for approval in the same time with this image? 14:42, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but no, because this counts as a new image. <span style="">19:00 Sun Dec 7

Ok,thanks for the answer 19:10, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

I thought the queens count as a redone image and we are allowed to have a kit on the approval page at the same time...? Or something along those lines. Ignore me if I'm wrong. 00:04, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

only those tht had images previously count and palebird didn't so this counts as a new image. 00:06, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. This looks very nice! =) 02:32, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thx:) 19:08, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Cloudberry (Ki) ~ For Approval
There are never too many kits. Comments?

Define the light on the tail.

Blur/smudge the ear pink. The Fox Girl (talk) 07:45, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Defined the light on the tail, also defined the light on her <= paw because of the light source and blurred the ear pink.

Shadow (Ki) ~ For Approval
Have a baby Shadow. 20:18, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Wikia doesn't want to upload Shadow, so here she is. 20:31, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Wikia uploaded it. :) 23:00, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

Re-uploaded 02:19, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink almost looks like it's falling out of the ears. Lol may you put it back in the ears? this is looking great! 19:14, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ^^''' 03:26, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Darken her base color? It looks dark gray. The Fox Girl (talk) 07:44, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Meh I think that is because of the highlight on the chest. If you look, as you move away from the highlight down to the legs, it's black. So I think it's alright, unless the highlight is so big it's throwing other people off.. Maybe shrink it a bit? 13:27, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

The highlight only has a 0.8 opacity, so it's hardly visible. Also, I colorpicked from her other images so the base color is probably okay. 00:55, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Fritz (RP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
I had so much fun with this..and I think it turned out wonderfully. Comments? 21:44, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

There's a faint texture on the white as well for the kittypet. It's hard to see, but it's there. I would know- I made that image based off a different one. Also move the collar down a couple pixels- it seems too far up near the head.

Re-uploaded. Thanks for telling me that..my eyes are pretty damn awful, so I wasn't sure if that was texture or an effect from the shading. Also I moved the collar down a few pixels^^ 22:42, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Language... Besides that could you define the ear pink? Really all it is, is grey. Like it a lot, though User:NikiandCats 23:33, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

'Damn' is an acceptable word to use here. It's used all the time and since we're all 13 or older, we can handle a word like that. She was fine in using it as she was talking about herself and not directing it towards another user or their work.

Re-uploaded.  Thank you~ That was the color I had picked from the kittypet's ear, but I defined it by altering it a shade or two, but that's all I'll alter it. And yeah as they said^^ 00:07, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on the tail? This looks nice! ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:19, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! 00:33, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, fixed some things hoping that'll get this approved faster. 04:09, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Brighten up the white and lighten up the shading just a bit. It's throwing off the color and making this look darker than his kittypet. Or, as an alternative, you could always thin out the shading. Also, I dunno if you got it, but the base is #B8B8B8. You probably can't tell because of the texture, so I thought I'd give you the coding.

Re-uploaded. Thanks for the coding, I think I was a few shades off before.. Also I screwed around with the shading until the white wasn't gray and the shading wasn't throwing off the color. 19:23, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading and tail shading? <span style="">03:52, 12/11/2014

I'd say define the shading in general. I can hardly see it anywhere. 04:00, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. eep you guys are killing me. XD But seriously this last upload is all I can define it or else we'll be back to where I was told to lighten it all up, and we'll have darkened white and messed up color. So yeah. 13:21, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (Ki) - For Approval
Tiny Fallen Leaves *.* All colors are from the .psd of the softpaw.

can u darken or define the shading or something i cant see it at all 23:23, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

I think the stripes are a little bit lighter on his softpaw image. Maybe lighten them up a little bit? 03:28, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Lighten them just a teensy bit more especially on the head. This is beautiful, you did wonderfully. 14:14, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. lmao all the stripes are on one layer, so if I lighten the head, I lighten all of them. They only look lighter on the softpaw than the kit because of the size of the blank, imho. I don't have as much "play room" on this than I do the other blank.

Fish Leap (K) - For Approval
Had fun with the pattern, not sure the shading color matches as well as I'd like. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:23, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the base a bit- it looks to be a bit lighter on the softpaw. I have no idea how she even made that but you matched it quite well.

I grabbed the color for the base from the lightest pixel I could find. I'll lighten it a touch, but I think lightening the shading might work better and still have the intended effect. And thanks. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:48, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Played around with the shading and the base color. Jayie Unwritten words~

Define the shading on the front legs. This is beautiful, Jayie! =) 03:34, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

tbh, it looks fine. It looks dark enough. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:27, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Um define doesn't mean darken all the time. It means "make more visible". I think it could be defined a bit more. ^^ 14:12, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
omg don't kill me for ruining Sparrow's images please <span style="">18:30 Tue Dec 9

Thin out the pale chest and define the shadin. This looks nice! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest edges into the fur more. He looks amazing, you did a fine job, Amber! 00:42, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the ear pink more. You made him purrty :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:51, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

the pale part on his face should only go up to his nose. 04:29, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks everybody ^-^ <span style="">18:03 Wed Dec 10

Define shading. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is dark enough. In fact, I think it could be lightened up a tad. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:31, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

It needs to be defined, defining doesn't just mean darkening. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:33, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a bit? I can't see the pattern through the shading. Nice job Amber. ^^ 01:52, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Just saw that Fox said that already. ^^ 01:58, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Night (Ro) (Ki) ~ For Approval
[spongebob voice] night 00:51, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading? This looks good! ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:48, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the shading's fine considering it's a black cat. <span style="">3:14 Wed Dec 10

Smudge the earpink just a tad more. bahahaha I loved that episode. But now I can't get his voice out of my head lmao 14:09, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 00:15, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (Kit) ~ For Approval
He's so cute :p ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:17, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading (so kawaii :3) 13:50, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki)~ For Approval
Woo~  First white cat (I really hope I did this right I don't wanna redo another charart :/) 11:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define ur light source. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:48, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up, too. It's making the white look pretty gray. 13:41, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

She's not supposed to be white. She should be a light color, hence why she looks off-white. The base from the kittypet is #E3E5E2. I'm also gonna rename this for you, since it should be File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png.