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Plumwillow (Alt W 2) - CBA
Matched colors/stripe style to manga. -- 23:10, October 30, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes end in a point? 00:42, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:12, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:54, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

I realize you're trying to copy what's shown here, but could you possibly make them slightly more solidified? As they are, it looks just like random scribbles. However, in the panel below what's shown in the image on her article, the stripe that we can see appears to be more like a stripe and not as scribbly. I have the same issue with this one..., the stripes really should not be as scribbled on as they are and a bit more uniform. ​​​​​

Reuploaded -- 00:19, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you taper the stripes more to a point as well?

Gonna make the argument that perhaps this is what you should be aiming for - scribbled, yet solid, because I concur with skye, but we also need to match the image. That's her one for this from the german wwiki (mine) btw.

Reuploaded There are some days where I can't stripe.. -- 15:36, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes end in a point? 04:08, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mother..knows..best Oops, this is what happens when you hear Tangled in the background when making art. -- 04:15, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add another strike? In the manga picture, there appears to be four distinct stripes.

Reuploaded I have now striked a stripe. -- 16:24, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the earpink up? Or desaturate it a little, its very red to me

Reuploaded -- 00:25, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 21:46, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Flamepaw (TC) (Apprentice) - CBA
this guy is my son now 01:27, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you dull the highlight (?) lighter texture a bit; they seem to overtake the base and making the image lighter overall than the kit. The eyes also appear more amber/saturated on the kit as well. 02:53, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded the eye color was colorpicked from the kit image, i dont know why the wiki is dulling it...i tried to fix it a little bit : ( 03:55, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Would you like the file for him if wikia keeps being a butt?

yea if u don't mind! i think it's fine for now though unless someone says something 21:19, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

just in case, I'll list the hexes here; base is #171514, and the texture is the same colour set to multiply @ 33%. Earpink is #624A45 and the nose is #230D05, and the base eye colour is #E35B22, with a dark blue to add depth. Hope those help! I used a dark blue for the shading as well, in case you wanted to match the tint at all~ :D

reuploaded i colorpicked everything directly from the file max gave me 02:08, November 5, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 21:47, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) ~ For Approval
to pay or not to pay for that first season of got

Remove the shading on the <--- Eye? Also I just have to say im LOVING The Squirrelflight Loner Art! Moo (talk) 08:04, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

There's a line of waste underneath the tail. 21:42, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

re-up thank you moo!

There's also two pixels of waste between the hind paw and the foreleg. 18:01, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 20:52, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Lo) ~ For Approval
yeet

Is it possible for you to sharpen the stripes just a little bit? They're a little less blurred on her other images. It's not too much, though.

Still working? 20:52, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt W) - For Evaluation
Here's my charart for Mudfur:



09:49, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles don't quite match. They're too overblurred and need to be sharper. Try looking at the old warrior for a reference. -- 13:33, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Adding on, here are some references: this and this. -- 15:40, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

His eye color on his other images seems greener, and darken the earpink. 17:47, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

There is waste floating all around the image. Remove the texture, the set doesn't have it, and define the pale belly. The mottles look better but some on the flank still don't quite match. They should be more rounded and there should be tiner specks mixed in as well. -- 23:02, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add depth to the shading and add shading to <--- that ear. 01:48, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:02, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded removed some waste 10:13, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to < ear  Crystie   You captured  my heart  10:24, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:56, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles seem too rounded and uniform compared to the alt star. -- 13:08, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded } 21:01, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded added some better flecks 08:08, November 4, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like Potato's comment still stands. 03:20, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:50, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded straightened mottles 06:57, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

The smaller flecks seem too large and the larger flecks are too round. They're more a flecked pattern instead of speckles and spots. The tail-tip should also be receded imo, and the brown seems too dark. This shows the belly color if you need it. I also should still have the files if you would like them, or hex codes too. Whichever you prefer. 21:55, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'd like the hex codes pls! 08:27, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

The flecks are #372009, the base is #a08a6c, the earpink is #78503a, the nose is #5a4333, the underbelly is #f1e1c2, and the eyes are #0b2a0d, #0b2a0d, #499851, and #bce5c1. And there's actually faint texture sparingly through the flecks at #a08a6c at multiply and half opacity ish. 14:42, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Also, can you add a little bit more depth? The image seems a bit flat. -- W i n d s o n g   (talk)   18:23, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Kitescratch (W) ~ For Approval
had a break but i'm back now for the time being. activity will continue to be spotty because of school  W i n d s o n g   (talk)   13:45, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, this looks great, but I thought I reserved this before? 14:52, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Windsong did reserve this before you, Les. I saw hers pop up in the activity feed before yours. -- 14:54, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Nvm then! maybe remove some of the shading on the <-- foreleg? 14:56, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree. That would contradict the light source because all the legs need be in shadow. -- 14:58, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, you could have a little bit of light there and it could still make sense with the light source. Also the eyes should be a little more amber? On my current screen they look a little washed out.

Seconding Max with this one. There are quite a few images with sources identical, or at least similar, to this who also have shading on the legs. I personally think the image could benefit from it, because otherwise it looks like he has darker legs (kinda like Sandynose or Finleap).

reuploaded -- W i n d s o n g   (talk)   18:35, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shade Pelt (K) ~ CBA
no this is a disaster. 03:51, November 4, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good, I'd never be able to do something like this. Smooth out the shading on the shoulder? 03:23, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Just takes practice! 16:49, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:00, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Splashpaw (TBC) (A) ~ CBA
Some of these kit blanks are hard to translate pattern wise to the apps 23:10, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:00, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Stonetooth (BP) (W) ~ CBA
fangs 01:44, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Dulled the stripes just a bit. 14:43, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:02, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
potato, i smudged the back shading but i couldn't do the front one because it would mess up the whole thing, so i blurred it. i think i failed at colorpicking and texture. ;-; 04:14, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

The texture needs to be drastically sharper but I think you're on the right track. 17:39, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

I added another layer of texture to make it sharper on a lower opacity. '''reuploaded. 06:24, November 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

The texture can be sharpened more, and it looks like he also has some lighter texture on his other images. Can you smudge the earpink into the pelt too? 21:06, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Stormcloud (K) ~ For Approval
08:42, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Hey! Great job on Stormcloud ;) My image took a month and got a dec... There is a little grey patch in the ear, towards the top left/left. Could you fix that pls? The tail also appears kinda textured with the smudging. Probs shouldnt give so many tips as I myself failed XD --Wavetail (talk) 09:29, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

That is ear fur. -- 13:49, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

re-up all it takes is practice!! any tips are taken into consideration. 16:29, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

I want to say maybe thin out the dorsal stripe above the bum a little? going by the other images, it doesn't seem that it would be so thick across that area?

re-up 15:59, November 7, 2019 (UTC)

Littlekit (YS)- For Evaluation
not sure why it’s so small, I don’t know how to do this-- 15:24, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images. This file has to go under Littlekit (YS).kit.png. Upload your photo under here. 15:54, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

What program are you using?

16:04, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

I forgot what it’s called, it probably messed up because I had to transfer it from computer to iPad, its the only way I can. How do I put it under that-- 17:29, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

To reupload over File:Littlekit (YS).kit.png, just click on the link, scroll down past the file history and flick "upload a new version of this file" and upload your image. 17:42, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I don’t have acces to it now so it will have to wait for a couple hours. (When I get a chance I will have to blur the tabby markings a little bit) And I use some basic, free, beginner program for my art so...yeah...-- 17:53, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the previous version of the image, just as a head's up. You can view that here. ​​

The blank size is far too small. Try saving from, save it as Littlekit (YS).kit (png will automati​cally save) and then upload it under the latter name. -- 18:24, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, everyone for the help (this is so hard).-- 18:31, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

The other image I copied off was pretty blurry/faded looking but I tried (I’m still pretty bad at tabbies)

Cinnamontail (K) - For approval
I love her <3 23:59, November 6, 2019 (UTC)