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Spiderleg (Star) ~ For Approval
Hi 19:21, 6/13/2018

can you define the shading a wee bit? 23:53, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also fixed the eyes, they looked yellow. 23:58, 6/13/2018

Onestar (star) - For Approval
19:21 Wed Jun 13 19:21, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Soften the shading on the front legs, and a bit on the chest and shoulder. 21:23, 6/13/2018

Reuploaded 22:32 Thu Jun 14

Needletail (Star) ~ For Approval
ew x100000

20:29, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

This is awesome, dude. Hm. I think the tail shading is a bit blotchy, and, I don't know, she looks a bit lighter than her other images? It might be how you made the texture, though.^^ 20:38, 6/13/2018

Could you make the texture a bit rougher, for lack of a better word? The apprentice is the first in this set, and most of the texture on her other images don't really match what I had. (  20:39, 6/13/2018  ) ​ (  20:39, 6/13/2018  )  (  20:39, 6/13/2018  ) ​

Thanks Broken ^^ So I made the pelt lighter by a shade or two and I redid the tail shading and texture, hopefully it looks slightly better.

20:49, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

define the white chest? 21:23, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Soften the shading on the flank and tail a bit? It's looking blotchy to my eyes. Nice job. 21:34, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd for the unknown resident image? The colors for her stuff are a little tricky because of the texture. <span style="">21:36 Wed Jun 13

Can you add a little shading to line the bottom of the chest? Just a tad, but there would be some there because of how the light is

Sun, that would be amazing. I'll shoot you my email on your talk page. Once I get the file I'll update guys. ^^ 23:10, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

I wouldn't say they're tricky, but I would again like to stress that the apprentice is the first in this image, so all others should match that one. I still have the file for the apprentice if you want that one as well.

That would be amazing as well. I’ll send you my email on your talk page, Jayce. I’m a bit rusty on my charart skills lmao 14:16, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Guardian Cat Blanks - For Approval
honestly i'm pretty sure these are a bit big so if yall want i can try and resize them. sorry they're not the exact same as on the nominations, i used them for my own wiki and tweaked the tails and long fur a bit, hope its not a problem.

Maybe add another toe to the short-haired blank to match the long-furred one. <span style="">21:21, 6/13/2018

reups i noticed that before you commented and actually did the opposite, woops.

Yes, can you try and resize them? 21:51, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

reups some pixels were lost in the resizing but i tried my best to restore them. that was so much harder than it needed to be.

Are whiskers a requirement? I’m wondering if you should add them, but idk. 23:45, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

can you make the face look more fluffy and the tail on the longhair? 23:52, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

smooth out the lineart on the shorthaired's belly? it looks a little uneven on the > side of the cat

reups guess i forgot to readd whiskers after resizing it oops

Maybe make the back paws a little bit bigger? these are great^^ 02:54, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Thin out the top half of the shorthair's tail a bit?

Gonna butt in here and say the short-haired tail looks fine to me. I don't think it needs to be thinned out at all, considering multiple blanks we use have that same style.

Gosh I do love these. Could you thicken the lineart on the feet and somewhat up the legs on the front paws? (On both blanks) 00:00, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

reups thanks ^^

Perhaps thicken the lineart on the backside of the longhaired and along the topside of the > ear on both^^

Jagged Peak (ES) ~ CBA


CBA? <span style="">01:10, 6/15/2018

Harepaw (VS) (Ki) - For Approval
tried shading with the brushes i have in firealpaca since i havent done a full charart with it before, couldve been worse.

Define the shading depth everywhere, but especially between the two legs. This looks good :) 22:29, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

reups ty but i still hate white cats with a burning passion. the kit blank however, has never done me dirty.

Expand the shading overall

reups i should really go back to the old art program for shading. oh, how i insulted its brushes. too bad i got so used to them i cant shade with firealpaca.

reups again redid shading. trying to keep it smudged

Plumpaw (TC) (App) - For Approval
i couldn't tell the difference between the lineart and the color. 00:38, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Ivypool (Q) ~ For Approval
Hi I'm gonna tweak this so she has shredded ears and so the shading actually looks good. Also, can we add stuff if it's a completely different side? None of the other images even show this side of her. I can take it off if I have to, don't worry.

it's all up to you what to put on the side that isn't shown, yes. 03:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Birchbark (A) ~ For Approval
Colors from the unknown file. Check out that shading whooooooo 02:55, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth

Reups 13:50, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading along the back and haunch?

Reups 20:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Tree (mediator) ~ For Approval
I'll fix some stuff later just....take it. I'm tired of looking at this colour right now 22:49, June 14, 2018 (UTC)