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Sorrelstripe (Queen) - CBA
Time to slink back into cat art hell now I've fixed my programs :) Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 15:58, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lessen the belly shading some?  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:25, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I don't really like to just say it's fine much when possible but I feel like the belly shading is ok, my minor character queen has roughly the same amount. I'll do it no problem though if someone else agrees with you, Mink. ;; Squidward Plays All  Star. I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:07, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

meh it looks fine to me, sorry mink. 18:18, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

The base appears lighter than the apprentice, which I believe is first in the set? 18:28, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you center the pupil on the -> eye <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:13, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

You still have some time left, but are you still working? 17:27, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I'm gonna try and re-up either tonight or tomorrow probably <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 19:10, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

reups i tried this was a very weird process <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Onestar (Warrior Alt) - For Evaluation
Im not very sure if this can be made but I saw it under the characters that need art. I tried to make it as similar as possible.

Sorry if I did make a mistake of making this, im very new to the project so here it is... Kezii (talk) 01:43, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

By the way I also used FireAlpaca if there needs to be changes. Kezii (talk) 01:45, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Welcome to the project! You are able to make this i believe, but since this is your first Chaart, this is for Evaluation I'm pretty sure, Don't thumb your images or align them (|thumb) (|left or |right), Put the image before any flavor text you wanna put along with it! This should be named File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png aswell. The < eye is looking a bit gray, and shading could be defined. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:03, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I have the leader file from when I was doing this, I can email if you want? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:56, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink. 13:37, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I tried all the suggestions, fixed gray eyes, and added ear fur (to make it more similar to the alt leader) Kezii (talk) 23:14, May 29, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into source mode and remove the |thumb. Also avoid thumbing by going to the file and click "Upload a new version of this file". You need to upload this as File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png, or the image won't work with the wiki's templates. The lineart also appears to be missing in some places, namely the ears and paws. Brighten up the white on both paws, and define the shading everywhere on the white. Can you also smooth out the chest shading? 00:29, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

The texture, I believe, looks a little rough. Could you smooth it out?

The hind paws should be white too, and I think the hind paw furthest from us is hidden? It should be visible. 01:14, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Oh, and I use firealpaca too so if you have any specific questions, let me know :) 01:21, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could also afford some smoothing on the hind leg closest to us. 20:55, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

idk if it’s just my phone screen, but there appears to be red around the lineart? some of it seems to be on the lineart

yeah, the colors seem to be leaking out of the lineart, and the lineart itself is red/blurred in some places. <span style="">13:33 Sat Jun 1

idk if this has been said already so sorry if it has, but some of the lineart appears to be missing. <span style="">12:58, 6/02/2019

You still have plenty of time left, but are you still working? 01:54, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ashheart (W) ~ CBA
All colors from original image. Comments? 00:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch and < front leg shading, and I feel a small touch of light on the chest would help add some depth

Reuploaded. 03:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a little shading depth on the section of the tail furthest away from us (the top half)

Reuploaded. 02:07, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Beech Tail (k) ~ CBA
i like... tried to match the old kit, but i don't think i did the stripes justice

Could you add some shading behind the ear (on that ear fluff), and maybe define the shading depth all throughout? 01:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups

The shading is leaking slightly away from the lineart at the base of the cheek, essentially where it meets the neck. I also believe some shading could be added to the front leg that shows along where it meets the tail, and have it recede from the back in both places it meets by a bit

reups hope i understood what you meant correctly!

Yup, that's what I meant. Extend the shading a little more to get closer to those tufts of fur that represent the back of the head and lessen the shading on the < side of the haunch, and I think you'll be close to done by then

reups

CBA? 23:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Doestar (W) - CBA
Oml I thought I almost missed my chance to snag this lol. I love this pattern and I tried to follow the shading style that was going on in her set. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  03:04, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the back leg closest to us. 03:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I left that section of shading sticking out to sorta do an illusion of the bent leg, similar to this. (I admit i didnt use a ref beforehand)

Can you define/expand the tail shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added shading to the right ear as well. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:41, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the bottom of the < front paw?

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:59, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Cloversplash (W) - For Approval
Comments? I love that clover leaf. 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

She's dark brown, I'm v sure the splash should be clover shaped. It should probably match what the old one shows. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading needs to be smoothed out around the chest/legs and there is a bit of waste by the tail 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It says shaped like a clover leaf, not a clover itself. I'll fix the base and shading tomorrow *decides to steal Loudbellys coloring*. 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

a clover leaf is a clover lmfao, either way it should resemble the shape of a clover. Shouldn't the coloring match the old one??? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with mink :/

04:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't the clover technically the whole plant, and then a clover leaf is an individual leaf? I'm not sure, but Potato might have a point. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

no, lmao. the shape on the muzzle doesn't even resemble clover leaf, I said that this should match the colors and design of the old one <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:59, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I know what you were saying, I was only arguing about the "clover leaf isn't a full clover" thing. Anywho, Potato I think there's waste on the actual lineart of the tail, as well as near it like Ty pointed out. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  05:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

didnt we aree that all iamges should match the old one or whatever 12:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

If that's true, I'm fixing it right now. 13:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded So I googled a clover leaf and what I got was a full clover, so I matched it to best of my ability. 13:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to be the unpopular one here, but I think Potato and Jose were actually correct. It should be one of the leaves, not the entire plant. It explicitly says "a clover leaf", and if you look it up... you get things like a three or four leaf clover, meaning that a "clover leaf" is singular. You were correct in your statements, Potato and Jose. Please go and change the marking back to how you had it, but perhaps shrink it just a little bit. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded  16:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

It says that the white flash is on her nose, and this looks like it's on her forehead. Could you move it down so it touches the top of the nose? Also, can you curve the haunch shading to match its shape? 16:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the shape wider and kind of heart shaped. These are clover leaves for reference. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded me tries  16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

You could do something like this maybe. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:48, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded arghhh  19:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you also define the ear pink? i cant really see it espeically on the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There should be light on the legs with this source <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:16, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The source is fine- this was used on two other images. See below. 13:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

While this source has been used, those other images have a lot more depth on the front legs so they're not all flat; if you could do that some, that'd be great.

Reuploaded  23:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears very blotchy on the haunch. Could you please smooth it, along with on the front leg closest to us? 23:25, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate the haunch shading  00:28, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar (W) ~ For Approval
I'm still experimenting on the tint, the shading is sposed to look like it does btw <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups here we go <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading?

Also, looking at the leader, there should be at least a scar on this side.

Looking at the old warrior, he didn't get his scars til he was a deputy? I asked about that before I started and I was told he didn't have them during this time <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:38, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I also went to check his page for the cites of the scars but he doesn't have them?? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm unless a cite pops, it's fine as is. But, the haunch shading does need to be receded here, the source doesn't call for this much.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:00, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading on the flank and top of the haunch? There's also a spot of shading on the top part of the tail, almost near the tip, which I don't think would be there? 23:30, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarstar (W) ~ CBA
here he is, apparently my laptop cut off the lineart a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:26, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a block of waste by the tail

Same comment for haunch as is on Blackstar

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:09, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:31, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Bluebellkit (K) - For Approval
I think I did very well with my first white cat. Comments? 13:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

blur the shading along the tail near the point? <span style="">14:48 Sat Jun 1

Reuploaded  15:53, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Same thing as Blackstar. 22:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

is it possible to curve the shoulder shading some more? it looks odd with it just being a straight line. 22:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, its really rough <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Remove waste and define the light on the tail

Reuploaded  00:03, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:15, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to break CBA, but I still see several issues apparent. The shading is leaking away from the lineart slightly on the haunch, and I believe that back paw that's visible would have the barest touch of light, since it's the shorthair blank, it's showing enough for there to be some. The shading on the face shouldn't go quite so far up the muzzle, and should connect > way along the jawbone, and wrap upside the head to cover the back of the head's tufts of fur. The shoulder shading is still in that awkward spot mentioned by skt earlier; I believe that could be removed entirely. The shading depth should be defined on the visible front paw/lower leg area, and there's shading leaking from the arm onto the < side of the haunch, which shouldn't be there.

Blackstar (K) - For Approval
I don't think the back paw farthest from us would be showing, so I didn't add it. Anywho, comments? 13:52, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the black paws a bit more? 16:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waster, and it looks almost like there's a gap in the haunch shading. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 16:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the gap in the haunch shading is intentional, Baykit's source has the same gap. 16:43, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little overall. 18:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

The black on the hindleg needs to be higher. As his others show it about just about a bit of his ankle wise so both would almost cover his back paws completely.<span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:18, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a patch of shading leaking onto < side of the haunch. 22:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Its leaking on the stomach too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:44, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading

12:24, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:03, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:48, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:27, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Same comments as on Bluebellkit, and also smooth the tail shading

Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
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Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
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Smooth out the haunch shading a bit? 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

honestly it could be smoothed out everywhere

Could you curve the shoulder shading up onto the shoulder. Right now it seems like it stops abruptly there and kinda throws it off a bit. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Briarlight (Kit) ~ For Approval
it is she 21:53, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and paw? 22:20, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 16:01, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink seems different from the other images. 01:56, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Beetail (W) ~ For Approval
Let's try this again. Tinystream (talk) 02:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This should match the star and the deputy. The stripes on these seems thinner, rougher, and more bunched up together. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:40, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This actually matches quite well, Mink? Could you possibly define the shading depth on the chest (near the arms)?

The stripes don't seem to cross like this on the others unless my computer screen is showin it too dark. They're also more smudged and rougher looking <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:23, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Mink. The stripes appear rougher and closer together on the other images. 18:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

https://www.ezimba.com/work/190603C/ezimba15349395102400.png here's the unshaded version to help with stripe placement. The colors look good

i think there's a line of waste under the tail... i forgot to remove that too in mine

Brightflower (K) - CBA
09:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This is so cute, Finch. Can you define the paw shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:31, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you! I've extended the shading and added depth. 15:07, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you extend a small line of shading to the chin and to define the muzzle part? Barely needs to be there, but a touch would help it not look flat

Re-uploaded - I extended some of the shadings from the chin, hows this? 21:06, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out? 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out more. It's still very sharp, and the revision history shows only slight changes.

Ambermoon (Ki) ~ CBA
i love

12:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little bit of shading to the front arm that's visible, kinda just in that spot where the tail and haunch meet to a T

Can you smooth it on the tail a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:51, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reups yes 01:55, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:33, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shanty (Ki) - CBA
<span style="">13:24 Sun Jun 2

maybe soften the face shading just a wee bit? looks a bit hard compared to the rest. 20:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">13:18 Mon Jun 3

CBA?

Cloverfoot (K) ~ For Approval
i'm not sure if i should put the heading as for evaluation since i already uploaded something but it got declined rip. i really want to play sa2 <span style="">13:44 Sun Jun 2

You're fine- Spooky moved you to apprentice rank cause a few years ago you were an apprentice. Smooth out the shading? 15:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the stripes could stand to be slightly thickened on the body, and given a slightly rougher more paintbrushy feel, like the loner and rogue

re-ups tried a new brush and repainted the stripes since smudging them didn't really look good. started coming down with a really bad cough yesterday and it turns out im still bad at sa2 so theres that <span style="">13:37 Mon Jun 3

I believe the stripes on the tail could stand to be thicker to match, and overall they could be just a little less sharp

Applefur (TF) (W) - CBA
TBH I don't remember how I did the defunct Star, which was based on the OG warrior lmao <span style="">18:36 Sun Jun 2

Could you define the shading on the ears? 22:11, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I purposely have the earpink above the shading. We've never been required to have shading on it. If I move it I will constantly get told to define the earpink. <span style="">22:31 Sun Jun 2

Don't hate me but I'm having a hard time seeing the ear pink, so matbe define that but the shading itself there seems fine to me <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:34, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I brightened it a bit, that should fix it. <span style="">13:16 Mon Jun 3

CBA?

Birdy (K) ~ CBA
18:43, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Since its described as a dark tuft, shouldn't it be similiar to like some darker haur sticking up? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:36, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Don't think so, since I've always been following the manga. 23:52, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Then in that case just ignore me loll <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (W) - CBA
pro tip: look at the character's design before you reserve it 0.0  20:27, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Nice work! CBA? 23:36, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Buster (K) ~ CBA


CBA? 02:06, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Conefoot (K) - CBA


Can you define that paw shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:45, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA?

Clovertail (K) ~ CBA


If I'm not mistaken she needs to be Shorthair ^^ unless we've gotten a cite for her being long hair <span style="">01:08 Mon Jun 3

Reuploaded yeah rip you're right, that was just a tired me moment

CBA? 02:09, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Dragonfly (Ki) ~ For Approval
imaliveiswear

00:49, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a dorsal stripe and I think the stripes are more jagged. 01:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the dorsal stripe? Im having a hard time making it out, or matbe thicken it some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:25, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Star Flower (K) ~ CBA


CBA? 02:10, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Apple Blossom (W) ~ For Approval
okay thats enough cat doodles for tonight

01:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

The colors dont quite seem to match her others. The stripes should be sharper and the design should probably match the style thats going on there, she seems to have side stripes more so on her other side which should probably match this side too in style <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i think you should darken the shading a little :O 18:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Reuploaded 19:35, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

there's a line of waste underneath the tail and the back paw furthest from us doesn't seem to be filled in

Berryheart (Ki) - For Approval
01:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the tint of the shading? It seems too neon <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:16, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I personally think the tint is fine, if anything, perhaps define the depth on the front paw, just a bit. 13:47, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

It's a curious case for the tint. While it is artist choice, and we can't technically make people change anything in the normal run of things, the rest of this set has either black or dark blue, so the purple will make it incongruent. If you don't want to change it, we can't really make you, but I'd give a recommendation to make it darker just for set matching purposes.

Reuploaded. Yeah, it looked off when I posted it to here. Looked fine on SAI at first, though. Seems to be a common theme for me. 15:13, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfoot (W) - For Approval
Plan to mess with the shading but I wanted to get this up before I go to bed since I have work tomorrow. 01:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading a bit towards the edge to smooth it out. This is really good 👌 <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:43, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also remove the shading at the top part okf the trai tip? With your source that wouldn't be there <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:24, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried lightening it as well, but it looks like I didn't do anything. Curse SAI... 15:15, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) ~ CBA
My favorite. All colors from alt. leader. Comments? 01:55, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the facial shading some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:43, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 13:48, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Gooseberry (W) ~ CBA
I think I did a better job matching the queen this time around. 01:57, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Alder (Kit) - For Approval
hi. my naem squidwardo. i draw katz. i believe this is freegame so its time to get revenge on this pattern bc if u didnt know my first charart was one of alders set that got declined. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:50, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add variation to the flecks, and define the gray flecks. 02:51, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the gray flecks tho 04:13, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I do agree, they need defined <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:16, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Would you care for one of the files? I have the hunter, and I think I still have Jayce's old warrior. 14:56, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you thin out the shading and possibly change the tint? It's throwing off the color and making it look extremely different. I know tint is often a choice, but this is making it look very red.

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
black cats are my allies 04:20, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a bit if depth to the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 02:02, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading? Ik it's a bit tricky with black, though, so however much it can be

Tornear (K) ~ CBA
my first image :0

Define shading a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:16, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

CBA?

Beetlewhisker (W) ~ CBA
his death actually made me feel sad.. but he's not actually dead is he?

CBA?

Harrybrook (W) ~ For Approval
Ahhh by first every charart. <3 14:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I want to do my first, Brackenfoot, but he's not on the art list so I'm not sure if I'm allowed. Lol anyways, can you smooth out the shading on the stomach/where the haunch meets the stomach just a tad? This is great. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:30, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

reups Thanks! 15:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to double-check with the OA of the loner, but I'm not 100% sure he needs the pale parts, since that was a graphic novel cite that was leftover when we only had that description for him. It's possible that was overlooked with his images due to it only being gotten rid of fairly recently.

Leafshade (W) ~ CBA
15:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sandynose (W) ~ CBA
15:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Bristlekit (WC) (K) - For Approval
stars not in use so

Renamed it for you. ^^ Make sure to reupload over File:Bristlekit (WC).kit.png 17:51, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Cinderfur (W) - For Approval


20:41, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? 02:16, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading as well? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  03:49, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudberry (TC) (Ki) - For Approval
Not too sure about the shading. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  21:41, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back? It's making her look almost gray and white. 13:51, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:46, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could still be lightened, even with the new source

Brightheart (Alt. K) - For Approval
trying for a more traditional tortie this time 22:15, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (K) ~ For Approval
did the warrior so i thought i might as well do the little guy too 23:48, June 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Brackenfur (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 02:14, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Might you lighten the shading and smooth it out? I think it might be my laptop, but it's looking really blocky, and that sometimes happens when shading is too dark.

I can see what you what you mean, can you define the light on the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:22, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:21, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (K) ~ For Approval
Dunno how to feel about this -Shadow   hOnK :o)  03:35, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Pinestar (W) - For Approval
Not giving him the scar or the torn ear due to that cite being while he was leader.

Could you darken the shading just a tick?

Pinestar (Ki) - For Approval


Could you expand the tail shading a bit? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:20, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Birchface (Ki) - For Approval
All colors from the warrior.

I'm having a hard time seeing the stripes more than the warrior? Would it be possible to maybe defined them or something just a tiny bit. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:20, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Buster (W) ~ For Approval
fun fact: oa was my friend in primary school before she moved and she introduced me to warriors and this wiki :)

Fernsong (Q) ~ For approval
don't see what there is to discuss but I'm posting this for now anyway. 07:11, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Possibly define the facial shading?

i was so confused at first lol. could you define the shading on the foreleg closest to us?

Can you define the light on the ta some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:18, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt. K) - For Approval
this was actually difficult; tweaked the mouth lineart a tiny bit, but added shading to try and show the "twist" + added some bit of a lip to show it more?

Could you possibly show thw tweak a bit more? I'm not really seeing it? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:18, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

There’s only so much you can do with this angle - I’m gonna wait for more comments before changing anything

Maybe you could make his tongue poke out? I think that'll get the message across. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:53, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Tulipkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
13:45, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (K) ~ For Approval
owo 14:22, June 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you darken the shading just on the parts that aren't white? :3

Strikestone (W) - For Approval
My baby boy <span style="">15:28 Tue Jun 4