Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 16

Weedwhisker - Withdrawn


.Mossflight 20:40, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good, but try to make the dots more irregular and different shapes and sizes.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 21:40, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Im withdrawing until I'm done being grounded. Mossflight 23:07, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

That’s a good reason. :) Archiving. -- Bramble -san  23:14, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Tadpole (Ki) - Withdrawn
= Well, here it is. Mossflight 21:49, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

So cute! Just darken the shading a little, and maybe make the nose a bit duller; right now it's bright pink. -- ♫ Ec ho mi st Talk/Contribs 22:37, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink our left is good, but make the right one the same color.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:05, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Darkened Shading, fixed ear pink. Mossflight 19:35, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

The nose pink is too bright right now. Try dulling it down a bit.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 01:47, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. Mossflight 21:28, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

The only problem I can see is that the shading is barely visible, especially along the left of the image, the legs and the neck. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:30, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawing. See my Weedwhisker for the reason. Mossflight 23:09, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Birchstar (SC) (L) - Withdrawn
I attempted the shading style Quiet used on Dawnstar but not nearly to the sae quality, partly because of my lesser artistic skills and partly I think to the colour of the cat. Anyway, I'm working alphabetically down a list so here's Birchstar the third or w/e. Constructments? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:53, November 2, 2009 (UTC)


 * I don't see the shading hardly at all on my computer. Although I don't see shading on hardly any of the cats on here so it could just be my monitor. Also I'd make the spots a little more random, right now they look like a polka-dot pattern. :) Looks great otherwise! Goldencloud 20:01, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

two Edit conflict (looks at Goldencloud XD) I can't see a lot of shading. welcome back Goldencloud :) not that I know you :) Brambleclaw14 Talk 20:04, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

I can see the shading, the color's just too similar to the base color (so just darken the shading, in other words). Also, the link in the title of this section didn't go anywere (the "SC" had to have parenthases around them), so I fixed it up for you, if you don't mind:3. --Hawktalon Talk 21:01, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

I can see the shading, but I have to look very closely. You need to darken it.-- *Minn owc law*  22:58, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I fixed the shading and randomised the 'flecks' or w/e you want to call them. Thank you Hawktalon =) OT: Wow... you need a nickname and so does Mosspath as I already have Hawkey and Moss as Hawkfire and Mosswhisker... hmm... Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:55, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Sandy (Can I call you Sandy) you can call me Mossy.-- Mossy SC  20:02, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

lol cool =) Of course you can Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:41, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really say as I haven't read Code of the Clans yet, but didn't we decide that there wasn't actually a description of her in there? That was why my Birchstar had to be declined. -- Dawnfeather talk! 21:46, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know about that, but if not, can you add some highlights and blur the shading more?-- *Minn owc law*  22:06, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

You're right Dawn. Curse my poor memory i've made a list you see of all the cats needing charart and I'm just working down in alphabetical order. I trust the wiki pages too much for something anyone can edit; even with so many great users things seem to slip through. Withdrawing. I'll try and do ''something' with the image... If I do use it again then i'll sort the shading and add highlights Minnow - thanks x Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 22:24, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

That's a shame couse this is really good! T.T-- Mossy SC  23:04, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Bone - Declined
He. Killed. Whitestorm. >=( Anyway, constructments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 23:00, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is pretty good! I feel the same way about him. LOL. For the image, his stomach looks bare. Try giving him a small patch.-- *Minn owc law*  23:11, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

How dare he kill Whitey!!! T.T Anyways, do as Minnow says, and I can't really see the shading on the black patches...or is it just my eyes.-- Mossy SC  23:53, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Happy to know we all love Whitestorm! =) But if anyone happens to not like him, I dare them to say so. *Hiss* Okay, awkward moment. Anyway, is this better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 00:11, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Now I see the shading, great job! Mossy SC  00:18, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I now that I said small patch, but can you make it a little bigger? 'Cause it still looks better. Also, I dare any of y'all to say that they like clawface. (Sorry about the y'all. My sister is watching Hannah Montanan.)-- *Minn owc law*  00:28, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

(lol) Eww Clawface! Yuck. Yeah, Minnowclaw says it all! -- Mossy SC  00:30, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

How's this, y'all? ;) -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 00:32, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

lol. A bit bigger. Make it so that it goes above the leg line art.-- *Minn owc law*  22:02, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I really hate to say this but, Shimmerpool already reserved Bone. --Hawktalon Talk 22:27, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Honeyfur, maybe you can talk to Shimerpool.-- *Minn owc law*  23:00, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

That's so weird; I checked all the reservations before I started him. I guess I must have missed Shimmerpool's. But it's okay; Shimmerpool can do him. =) -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 23:58, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Pity, because this is really good. If there's any other black-and-white rogues you can find, feel free to resubmit as another character. -- Bramble -san  04:17, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Marshscar-Declined
My first cat, comments?--AutumnSky 01:47, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

The background needs to be transparent, there need to be a few more scars, the ear pink needs to be more in the ear, the shading needs blurred, the ear pink will also need to be blurred, and the eye needs colored in. Also, the battle scars that you have right now are too bright, and need to be blurred thoroughly. And there is lineart missing in some places, and extra lineart was added in some other parts. The shading also needs to be thickened and darkened. And since his page doesn't say what color his eye is, sometimes you just have to guess. For Marshscar...I'd say give him amber eyes, since his name is Marshscar. Good job for your first charart! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:56, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Icethroat covered it all, except the bg is gray. I have a guide to simple charart on my page if you need help.-- Darkhallows 03:43, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the bg to white for you, AutumnSky (unless you would prefer to be called something else). Hallow's Eve 09 00:51, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Autumnsky, this hasn't been worked on in a week, please work on it or it will have to be declined.-- *Minn owc law*  01:46, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.-- *Minn owc law*  01:22, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Cloversplash - Declined
While going through the code of the clans cats, trying to find one which had a description. (hey, about that, if you find a cat who doesn't have a description (say, Hayberry or Greenflower) what do we do? Make one up in consideration to what is most likely? (Hayberry - ginger, and Greenflower - green eyes)????) So I made Cloversplash. Constructments? -- Dawnfeather talk! 12:11, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

It says that she has a white spot on her nose. Could you maybe move it down a little, or is it too hard?-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 01:48, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please work on this Dawnfeather.-- *Minn owc law*  01:47, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Please resubmit this soon.-- *Minn owc law*  01:24, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Moonflower(W)- Declined
I did her as long haired because I didn't know if she was short haired or long. but I guessed cause stormtail is short. So where does bluestars long fur come from? anyway Contructments =)--Darkmoon25 15:51, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Darkmoon, but new members are only allowed one image at a time until their first one gets approved.-- Ashstar My Clan 17:15, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ashshadow is right. You need to concentrate on getting Whitewing approved and then you can resubmit this. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 21:28, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Archiving. (Again, if I'm not supposed to archive images, tell me.) --Rainwhisker 09 02:30, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

You can but only 15 to a page please as now I have to move them over. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:50, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Redtail ~ Declined


this is my third... *Ivy pool*  06:31, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

All three already have approved images. You may also only have one UFA. Please read the notices at the top and check before putting them up.-- Darkhallows 07:27, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

blossomkit~Declined


how does she look?? *Ivy pool*  06:42, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

leafpool- Declined


comments? *Ivy pool*  06:54, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Please take some time to see how the project works Ivypool, or talk to your mentor if you need exra help Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:50, November 9, 2009 (UTC)