Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Folder for images that had been up for approval before the beginning of Tweak Week.

Bluestar (W) - Redone
So, I re-did the image, and I am sorry, but I do not know who made the image before. I wasn't sure if I should add the scar, so please tell me if I should. εСћб ђэάѓτ  11:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

i think should not cause was it seen on her leader or older warrior image? otherwise this is really good apart from the shading under the neck that i think is supposed to be there but i dont know  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 12:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading, ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I darkened the shading and blurred the highlights. εСћб ђэάѓτ  16:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but perhaps make the ear pink a bit bigger? insane brick'd 16:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto insane. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made ear pink bigger. How's it now? εСћб ђэάѓτ  17:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading needs serious blurring. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   18:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Is it okay? εСћб ђэάѓτ  18:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. The blue is a little dark--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit, she looks very dark compared to her other images Night  Fall 18:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

She's supposed to have a silver tinged muzzle and tail tip.XxdovesongXX 07:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

She only had the silver muzzle and tipped tail because she was getting old. I don't think it's needed on her warrior image, because she is still young--  Night s h i n e    ~  07:21, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made her lighter. εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading the back leg. ♥Ice shine★  15:59, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It could still be lightened more. I think the colour should be similar to her kit and apprentice images--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:30, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit too bright, try desaturating it some Night  Fall 17:10, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad, and make the muzzle silver. Dawny  19:40, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add the silver tipped tail? Mõŏń    ۞   03:59, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was after she got old Night  Fall 06:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

blur haunch shading. ♥Ice shine★  14:52, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink just doesn't seem right for this colour pelt. Perhaps take it from another blue-ish cat with a more natural colour. Maybe Mistystar? -- Sandy star 19:56, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I changed the earpink to look more like Mistystar's, I blurred as much as I could, and I desaturated it. I didn't add the silver tipped muzzle and tail because that was when she got older. εСћб ђэάѓτ  12:32, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

She's should be more of a gray color. Darkhallows... Mew? 18:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree with Shady; she needs to match the colour of her other images. Using the desaturate tool should do the trick and then redo the ear pink and eye colour. -- Sandy star 08:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Darken the shading ♥Ice  storm★  12:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree with Darhollows. Rubyblaze 19:01, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree as well, she looks very, very blue. It doesn't match her other images, really.XxdovesongXX 21:38, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is too blue, and very bad


 * Fluffybunnies, two things. 1] Please remember to sign with ~ . 2]'very bad' is not a helpful or constructive comment. If you think it is very bad then you need to give some help for the improvement of the image.
 * Echoheart, this image is not very bad at all, just follow the advice everyone has given. -- Sandy star 22:27, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy, Echo; I think your shading technique is absolutely beautiful Night  Fall 23:50, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Fluffybunnies, this this art is not bad, and believe it or not, some cats actually are blue like this. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 09:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Just do what is listed above and this will look great. I love your shading! --Willo wwh isp 16:11, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks to all of the people who said great things about my art :) Anyway, I tried to make it more gray, but I don't think it worked. Comments? εСћб  ђэάѓτ  17:29, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to desaturate it some more. Other then that it's lovely. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:26, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, maybe you should add a scar on her shoulder too. Or should that only be on her leader image? Night Fall 05:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar (R) - Redone
I think it's not my best. . . but Ok. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   23:02, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks really cool! Add some more stripes, and darken the cream patches Night  Fall 23:10, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Blur the stripes too, and some lineart on the head is missing. ♥Ice shine★  23:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should compare it to the other images. her cream and brown are much darker, and the patches are more blurred. Good job, though :)XxdovesongXX 07:23, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the lighter cream patches, they are a bit too bright. Dawny  00:53, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Also, darken chest shading. ♥Ice shine★  22:07, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I didn't change the colors because I got them from her leader image. And the stripes are the way they are because I tried to make them like the warrior image. And I based the stripes off of that image, so I didn't add them. And I can't do much about the blurring. Pixlr sucks. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   00:50, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really know what to tell you than. The cream is too noticable, so darkening it might not be a bad idea. That small bit of line art on the forehead is still missing too. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  01:45, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too messy, blur them more, smudge them, or redo them. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:10, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine, it's just that you really need to darken the cream and I think it would help if you smudged it around the egdes with a fairly large brush, and then blur it. It always helps me for things like these. . .XxdovesongXX 21:36, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes - Willo wwh isp   21:47, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the cream and blurred the stripes. There was no missing lineart when I checked it. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   19:46, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the cream patches some more, to match her leader image.  Dawny  22:33, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry If I sound annoying, but in my opinion they do match the leader image. I checked. I got the original color from it. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   23:20, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the cream patches look a teensy bit orange to me. Not a huge thing though. Anyone else agree? Otherwise, disregard. It may just be my computer, acting up again. ωiſd ɦɛɑrŧ  05:06, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's not that the color of the patches is wrong it's just that they're more blurred in her leader image. See Ashshadow o  r Creamsplash  23:07, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Well different computers show the colors different ways. On the computer I am on now it looks fine, but on my laptop it looks light. I think you should keep it the way it is.Willo wwh isp 13:26, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Well if the blurring concerns you, I'll need some help. Pixlr is a load of ickiness right now and it won't blur worth a cent. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   23:02, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred the patches for you. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 13:38, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! I wish I could've, but you know how thangs is. XD Southern slang, ignore. Anywho, anything else that needs to be done? W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   02:10, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great!  Dawny  03:14, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandy star 14:02, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Gah, this sucks. Comments and/or critique?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:21, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:23, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and darken the shading-- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:25, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear fathest from us a bit.  Dawny  23:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken it, and blur it. Add shading to the head. ♥Ice shine★  00:01, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ah noes... the <3 colour is being lost by the removal of the shading. Definitely darken it and thicken it. The original shading was the right colour, just needed extending to other areas. -- Sandy star 08:38, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I completely redid it.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  17:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:36, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the muzzle and tail. ♥Ice storm★  12:11, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little.  Dawny  05:55, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:06, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. --<span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:red; Background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp 16:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading some more. Night Fall 05:23, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Flametail (A) - Tweaked
Same deal as his MCA image - it needed to be made longhaired, so I filled in all the new fur tufts (or whatever you call them) but left the original color as much as possible. How is it? insane brick'd 13:17, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit and lighten the ear pink-- n i g h t  s h i n e  17:40, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded insane  brick'd 16:41, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) - Redone


I have to say this was a bit challenging to do...whoever came up with Spottedleaf's wacky but beautiful appereance, I hope they have a cat like her to prove it! lol...anywayz it was kind of fun to redo and I did my best matching the patteren to her apprentice image and used the colors from it as well. What do you guys think?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:09, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions more, lighten the ear pink, darken the shading.-- n i g h t  s h i n e  17:41, July 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:04, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the white on the muzzle-- ♥Ice storm★  12:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

"Reuploaded--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:03, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 03:46, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit because it looks grey now. --<span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:red; Background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp 16:21, July 17, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Q) - Redone
Bleh. I doooooon't like this image. Good news: My tap number in a national comettion got third overall in the Pre-Teen Group :) Influx Lennon -   Ringo's Wife  23:22, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading a bit. Make it a bit more sandy coloured, it looks a bit pink right now-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  02:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more stripes-- ♥Ice storm★  12:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I I add anymore stripes, it won't look like Sandstorm anymore. I (think) I added the amount she has on her warrior image. Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  13:17, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more reddish.  Dawny  21:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

She's too dark. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Maybe lighten her a bit? -- Sky Dawn Light... 23:16, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

define the ear pink more. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;backround:lime;border:1px solid -moz-border-radius: 1em; color:purple;">MOSSLEAP:)

Define the stripes on her tail and forearms more.  Dawny  05:58, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

It may be just my screen, but she looks kinda pinkish to me. -- Sky Dawn Light... 20:15, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe it's your screen. She looks beautiful to me. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  10:25, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''This fails.... Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  12:07, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandy. I fixed up the shading and added some highlights. I also made the white chest smaller-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:30, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:32, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:46, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make the ear pink smaller. ♥Ice storm★  19:55, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I needs to be blurred. And the ear pink is .... to purple.21:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC) Darkhallows... Mew?

The earpink doesn't look purple to me. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  21:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blure the highlights more. - <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:red; Background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp   22:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened shading a bit, fixed highlights, and fixed ear pink a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:08, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

darken the highlights some. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:10, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need some blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   00:19, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:01, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur white transition. ♥Ice storm★  02:16, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:54, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the highlights are really bothering me. They're too bright and concentrated, and they don't look real, no offense. Make them more like Sloefur's or similar to that, if you can. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:41, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are blotchy-looking Tawny SMEASH 22:28, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I switched to my other computer to see if this would look different than on my laptop, and it did. I tried fixing up the highlights more-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:41, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions Night  Fall 00:44, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Since Nightshine is away at camp, I could take this over, unless anyone else is willing. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   03:15, July 17, 2010 (UTC)


 * You can if you want to although I don't doing it if you don't. The shading/highlights need blending. -- Sandy star 14:04, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded. I re-did the whole thing, and just tweaked it, which one do you like better? W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:44, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool (A)- Tweaked


I just lightened her. Darkhallows... Mew? 02:00, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger and blur the stripes. ♥Ice storm★  02:15, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I will change the ear pink, but I don't think the stripes need o be blurred a all. Darkhallows... Mew? 02:39, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make her a bit more brownish like her other images. I think the stripes should be blurred as well.-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:55, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I don't want to sound like a brat, but didn't Sandy say: 'we need to remember that we are only tweaking things that have been nominated for'?- Darkhallows not logeed on.

-sigh- The truth being that Sandy is struggling with this perhaps more than anyone else. In Bramble's absence I have made a mess of a lot of things concerning this Tweak Week. Bramble made it all very clear in the guidelines, but I have little in the way of wits this week and have managed to confuse myself so thoroughly that I have no idea whether I'm coming or going.
 * It should be noted that the Against tenants may be done if an image is up for improvement on the For tenants.

Seems I was wrong on yet another point and for that I apologise; completely my fault. I think the best thig to do is to ignore anything I have said and if in doubt, check the guidelines or wait for Bramble to clarify as I believe she is back now. Again, I'm sorry for me confusing everything as it has made this all much more difficult than it needed to be. -- Sandy star 12:53, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy is not to blame; we're all confused with the new process because we've never done it before. There is bound to be some miscommunication when there is something new being implemented. I'm not going to expect all of you to have these guidelines down perfectly, a) because I wrote them and b) some are hard to understand. I wish I had been here to help out during the beginning, as I was the one who came up with the guidelines, and I apologize for being gone. I'm here now, and I can answer any of the tricky questions you might have concerning Tweak Week. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 13:48, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looking at Leafpool's medicine cat image, this one needs to be slightly less golden and more brown overall, and her ear pink needs to be darkened. The herbs are also different colors, but that shouldn't matter. :) --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 17:27, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit lighter. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  18:51, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Bramble, just take the all the colours from Leafpool's medicine cat image.XxdovesongXX 22:39, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'm just.... redoing this. Sorry guys... I swiched computers (again._.) and getting all of my programs installed with limited internet access takes a little while Dx. Darkhallows... Mew? 08:46, July 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * better? Darkhallows... Mew? 09:05, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * You forgot the eye colour and make the ear pink more like her mca image. The herbs are look brown to me make them more green. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  10:30, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (E) - Redone
I re-did the shading and color to make it look more pale. I used the color of the queen image that was redone. Comments? Mõŏń    ۞   21:09, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Darken the ear pink a bit and define it-- n i g h t  s h i n e  21:50, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (D)-Tweaked
Original artist was Morningleaf. I thickened the shading and made the earpink less hot pink. Comments? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:40, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Possibly brighten the highlights. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   03:09, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

There are no highlights. They weren't there before so I didn't bother to add them. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  03:11, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. *shrugs* I guess you can't add them then, they might run into the shading and throw off the nice blurred look. . . W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   03:43, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I could darken the shading a little. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  14:00, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I wouldn't darken it any more if I were you as it stands out fine as it is. -- Sandy star 14:06, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Gallery Template?
What happened to the gallery template? It looks...weird Night  Fall 23:46, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I noticed that as well. All of the smaller images like the kits are out of alignment. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 23:50, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

I actually prefer the slideshows over the galleries now. And I knew something was off about that. . . W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   00:00, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I saw that too. The gallery template itself was not edited, however some wiki functionality has changed, see more info here (including the links). I don't know if it will be fixed, or if we can get the old format back. We'll see, and if no other solution, we can write our own gallery. Kind regards, <span style="background-color: #705EA0; -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Helix talk 05:32, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) --Saturated Patches
Very simple; saturated the patches. Dawny  03:29, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the white transition a lot, and darken the shading on the paws Night  Fall 07:04, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, it's very good Dawny!! [wish i could post an image up, I'm only an apprentice though :( <span style="color:Red; font family:Chalkduster; background:Black; border:5px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Saffron;">Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 22:49, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Morningflower (Q) - For Approval


I hope I did justice to your beautiful image, Sandy. Was nominated for shading issues; added some highlights and blurred shading to make it more three-dimensional, edited eye format, blurred and smudged some of the patches, and blurred ear pink. Further improvements? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 05:09, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I love it! Its very pretty!4pinkbear 14:14, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job Bramble. Darken the nose a tiny bit. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  14:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 16:27, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Notice
Due to the low number of image sections (and Bramble is loving it!) I've decided we can now permit two images to be put up at once. This is to better ensure that all the nominated images will be completed in time. Thanks goes to Sandy for altering the current projects chart to accomodate two image claims. Please note that this will only be in place during Tweak Week. I would also like to remind everyone that we are on a tight schedule; please update as fast as you can and those giving critique; don't be enormously picky about the image in question. Thank you, <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 18:44, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (W) - Tweaked
It needed a furry texture added, so I did my best. Original artist is the amazing Echomist. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:29, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good Mouseh but by furry texture it meant that smudgey effect on the stripes. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:45, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

*face palm* I fail. Lemme see what I can do. -- W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:51, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I tried and tried but no matter what it would always mess up. Any suggestions? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   21:03, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest using the smallest smudge tool. That might help. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  21:06, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think Icethroat did the original image...but I could be remembering wrong. Night Fall 04:48, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

If you want, I can do it for you? I use special brushes for mine ^^. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:39, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf(A)- Tweaked
Original user was Warrior<3. I darkened her base pelt, thickened the shading, and added highlights. Comments? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:56, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ashfur (W) - Tweaked
Original user was Insaneular. All he needed was a torn ear. Suggestions? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 20:37, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can you desaturate the earpink a bit? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  20:42, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

How's that? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 21:20, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate it a bit more maybe. The color just seems off to me. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:05, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I desaturated it a bit more and made the hue more red and less magenta. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 23:12, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (L) - Tweaked
Well, it said he had torn ears so I tore both. :) Bramble created this image. Comments?  Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   21:25, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Delete the little gray lines above his ears. Thats there with all the leader images I'm afraid.--  Gladiator  Band Geek  01:13, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Join
I probably should have done this a while ago, but can I join? I already have a very good knowledge of making charart, and I think I could contribute a lot to this project. Oblivion Got it memorized?  22:12, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, BeautifulOblivion. I'll add you in. These links can help you: here and here. As Tweak Week is currently in progress, new members are not allowed to post up art, but you can always critique on other images for the time being. Thanks for your interest in joining! --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 04:26, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble :) But I'm working on Blossomfall's alternate kit charart right now. Oblivion  Got it memorized?  12:49, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Honeyfern (A) - Tweaked
Changed color to light brown, and also played around with the shading just a little bit. Comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 22:13, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading  Birdstar  You infected me with mildew? 22:14, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   22:24, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Then I'll leave the shading alone unless anyone else thinks I should blur it some more.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 05:18, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Just Noticed . ..
I want to tweak Owlstar's image, but he isn't on the list. I could've sworn I'd nominated him because he needed thickened and blurred shading, but maybe I had some editing problem. What can I do? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   22:50, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble deleted any nominations that she felt didn't need to be changed. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 22:53, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should go talk to Bramble. I agree about the shading. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:03, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

I don’t recall deleting an Owlstar nomination; you’re correct about the shading, there’s a fairly sever lack of it. My judgment right now would be to hurry and get all the images that were nominated completed, because they need just as much or more attention as Owlstar. If we have any time left over, I’ll see about some other images we can do. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 04:26, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

SkyClan's Destiny?
Should we at least start chararts for cats that appear in Skyclan's Destiny? We do them for both long furred and short furred if we do not know the fur length. For the eye color, we leave it blank until the book is released and we see if we can find eye color reference. Then, when we have the fur length and eye color, then you just post it up on their page. Just a thought. My imagination is usually not wisely thinking. <span style="color:Red; font family:Chalkduster; background:Black; border:5px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Saffron;">Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 23:06, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

No. We're in the middle of Tweak Week so no one would be able to put them up for approval anyway. Besides most projects wait until the book is released before working on it's characters. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:14, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Join
Can I join? I downloaded the GIMP program recently, and I have now gotten the hang of creating Chararts. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">Out of my way, Kittypet! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">I'm not in the mood! 23:09, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, Destiny. I'll add you in right away. These links can help you: here and here. As Tweak Week is currently in progress, new members are not allowed to post up art, but you can always critique on other images for the time being. Thanks for your interest in joining! --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 04:26, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar - Tweaked


Saw that this image needed to be tweaked and so I decided to do it. Had to zoom in the find the original shading so I just took it away and redid the whole shading. The white was kind of hard to do with the original creators choice of color so let me know if I need to do that some more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd darken the shading. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:00, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better but you should darken the shading Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:42, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) - Tweaked


Original artist was myself. The image needed more shading; added some highlights and shading, added some furry texture on the color transition, and that's about it. Further suggestions? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 04:31, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

It (along with his other images) needs spiky fur. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 04:37, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks great! But I don't think that it needs altered lineart for the spiky fur, maybe just inhance the furry texture more? Night Fall 05:12, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the body shading a little more. =) -- Sandy star 08:02, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Stonestream (E) Redone
The original artist was Spottedwing I think. I completely redid the shading; and used the light source technique. I used a different color for the ear pink too. How is he? Night Fall 05:18, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Loudbelly (E) Redone
Again, I'm pretty sure the original artist was Spottedwing. I redid the shading, and it wasn't really dark brown before, it was dark golden. So I changed the color of the pelt. Comments? Night Fall 05:18, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ashfoot (D)- Tweaked
The shading needed to be blurred... or really, there was no shading, just highlights... so yeah. I added shading and blurred xD. Original artist was Sandy. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:33, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks much better now. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:35, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Darn my old computer; the screen didn't seem to much like black or grey cats and what I saw was entirely different from what everyone else sees XD I don't see anythig wrong. -- Sandy star 10:53, July 18, 2010 (UTC)