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Wrenflight (Star) ~ Declined
took way too long 02:57, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Nice texture! It looks like there's black at the edge of her eye-to the left or whatever-and I think it could be lightened❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 03:01, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

That's eye depth, Apple. Anyways, smoothen out the shading on the chest, this (-->) side. :) 03:14, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

I realized :/ Blur the texture a tiny bit❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 13:31, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Reuploaded  23:01, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the texture just a tiny bit? The lines don't seem to be nearly as sharp on her other two images. 00:21, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:11, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's me or not, but smooth out the shading?BrokenFoot 19:59, February 3, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded I think it's fine, but... 01:50, February 4, 2017 (UTC)

Could be smoothed out a fair bit more; remember, it should be more gradient-like, but this, for lack of a better phrase, cuts off.

Reuploaded 20:21, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think it could be lightened a little, the darkness doesn't look quite right as it is. and the shading on the head could curve with the head itself a bit more. 00:31, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:32, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth of the shading a little? I also think it wouldn't hurt to expand it a little farther downwards on the face. 13:44, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Add amber eyes, as per the cite on her page

Reuploaded Sorry for being late, I was sick 21:51, February 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading along the bottom of the head (around the chin) and smooth out the shading more on the flank, and possibly the tail? 13:00, 2/17/2017

Reuploaded 23:58, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe connect the shading on the side of the face with the chin shading? They look odd separated, and I'm pretty sure with that light source there would be some shading there. 23:15, February 18, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading on the <-- ear just a bit more

Reuploaded 00:49, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, I think my comment may have been misleading -- I meant for you to define the shading on the right side of the face, not the left side. I still can't see the shading in the bottom right corner of the face, and I don't think there should be all that shading on the left side of the face -- it contradicts the left-side light source that is represented by the legs, chest, and body. 21:39, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:53, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be my eyes, but it still looks like there's some shading on the left side of the face. Could you remove that, please? Define the light on the tail and -> foot too, maybe.  10:00 Thu Feb 23 

Reuploaded 22:19, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Your light source is contradicting with your shading placement. On the tail, the shading should be all on ==> side of the tail 19:50, 2/24/2017

Reuploaded my shading placement isn't the best 04:59, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

No I mean like the very ---> side of the tail on the whole tail, not the tip of the tail XD and the shading should all be on ---> side of the face. There's still some shading on <--- side that shouldn't be there. 19:29, 2/28/2017

Sorry, but due to the one month limit, I'm gonna have to decline this ;-; 03:41, 3/01/2017

Plumclaw (Q) ~ For Approval
Defined the shading more

Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 16:22, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think this needs a date and reservation on the chart

I reserved her. Reuploaded Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 20:37, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 15:09, Feb 16, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I can somewhat see that it is there, but it is extremely faint. If no one else is having issues seeing it, feel free to ignore this. I don't have the best eyesight at times. 18:43 Thu Feb 16

Could you define the eye depth some? Unless I'm blind and it's there. I can't see any, so if there's none, try using an orange color as the depth marker, because it will look better, depth-wise. 13:01, 2/17/2017

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  09:00, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 09:18, Feb 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us :) 01:56, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded . Starry Cat 17:10, Feb 27, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the <-- side of the face, belly, and front paws. And, could you perhaps expand the shading a little on the belly? It might help with the depth

I think that the depth could stand to be defined some more, it's looking quite flat. 19:31, 2/28/2017

Fallowstar (L) ~ For Approval
Haven't done this in a while. - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:06, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the lighter belly a little?

I can't see that the legs are lighter very well, either. 00:14, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yeah that was kinda dark. - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:30, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and shading on the face a bit. 01:54, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Don't the hind legs need to be lighter too? Shypaw11 (talk) 01:57, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded They need to be light but you can hardly see them. - Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  02:12, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken and define the shading? 13:06, 2/17/2017

Re-uploaded - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  21:55, February 17, 2017 (UTC)

Darken it a fair bit more, please.

Re-uploaded - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  23:50, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

I'm a little confused what your light source is. There should be at least some light on --> side of the chest. I'm not sure if it's because the shading is faint or what, but it looks a bit muddled there. Darken and smooth out the shading..its fairly blotchy. Sorry if this was a bit on the blunt side...I'm dealing with some housemate problems and typing this quickly on my phone... <span style="">22:32 Tue Feb 21

Try and add a little depth to the shading, that should help.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  03:21, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the lighter markings a little more, please, and blend them some more too.  <span style="">09:57 Thu Feb 23 

Re-uploaded - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  18:03, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the lighting on the front legs a bit 16:59, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  13:13, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's some light/shading leaking onto the belly down by the front paws. <span style="">19:31, 2/28/2017

shading could also use more depth to it. 20:49, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smudge/blur the lighter parts? 21:20, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Hawkstar (L) - CBA
jesus, this was hard to make, still not happy tbh. — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  18:34, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a bit?

Reuploaded — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  18:09, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like you should lighten the shading on the ==> eye so it's not all in shading. In this lightsource, there'd be at least some source of light shining in that eye. <span style="">19:50, 2/25/2017

Can you also smooth out the haunch shading? 21:01, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  21:22, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:40, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Dovestar (RC) (L) ~ For Approval
Eh...not totally pleased with the blind eye :/ Any advice? 18:50, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe, instead of the pupil being black, make it a milky-blue color? Blind eyes are usually like that. 19:00, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit, and perhaps smudge the gray paws and muzzle. This is also a good example of a blind eye, which I think is what Su was going for.

Reups Thank you so much. I hope this is better. 01:58, February 20, 2017 (UTC)

I don't know if I'm blind or not, but for a moment, I couldn't see the milky blue in his eye. 😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 06:26, February 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

His eye is fine <span style="">14:33, 2/20/2017

Could you expand the shading on the chest a little bit?  <span style="">09:52 Thu Feb 23 

Reups 16:57, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there'd be any light on the <--- haunch <span style="">19:32, 2/28/2017

Reups 00:36, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 21:21, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Raincloud (D) - CBA
I like her, she actually has some sense. 20:29, February 19, 2017 (UTC)

think u could define the shading on the shoulder just a lil? 20:49, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yep, hopefully it's not too sharp now. I can't do shoulder shading on these blanks, eek 21:21, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

You have no idea how long I've waited to do this ;-; CBA? <span style="">03:42, 3/01/2017

Fallensnow (Warrior) ~ For Approval
Not to be pushy. But aren't I supposed to be in the apprentices' section now? I asked to join, and Stealth welcomed me in, I just never got put into the group. :) 22:11, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading and define the earpink just a bit. Very nice (: <span style="">22:26 Tue Feb 21

A SW will add you in soon. Please be patient. You dont technically have to be on the list to be a part of PCA but just make sure youre keeping track of how many images you do so you can become a warrior later. As for the image, smooth out the shading some more <span style="">22:28, 2/21/2017

Reuploaded 22:32, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit purple-ish, maybe shift it more towards a pink? Also, I think the shading could be smoothed out a bit on the chest and tail. 22:36, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:50, February 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the head and neck area, and define the shading on the <--- front leg and hind leg the furthest away from us? 19:18, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:31, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the head and neck area. <span style="">02:16, 2/23/2017

Try and give the spots a little more variation in size and shape. Looking good :)  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas 

Reuploaded 11:11, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the neck. 00:24, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:53, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

I think it should be smoothed out a bit more on the legs, just the front ones <span style="">23:34, 2/27/2017

Sorry for double comment but it seems a bit odd to me that there's a darker line of shading on his back, but it doesn't follow to the haunch, and it seems to be like that in a few other places <span style="">19:33, 2/28/2017

Maybe lighten the shading on the leg, head and back down to her arm? For a moment, I thought it was a stripe.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 19:56, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Falling Rain (SC) - For Approval
meh  00:45, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Define shading depth on the belly a bit? 19:19, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:10, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the front leg that's on the ground, and possibly lighten it a tiny bit everywhere else?  <span style="">09:50 Thu Feb 23 

Re-uploaded 06:15, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

The shading on the front leg closest to us seems to have the lightsource confused. I believe that shading is supposed to be on the ---> side. <span style="">19:28, 2/28/2017

There's a small speck of waste next to the leg furthest from us. The front leg in case you get confused😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 21:27, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded 01:36, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

​Slatepelt(W)~For Approval
Sorry if I did something I wasn't supposed to, I forgot how to do everything...😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:17, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded! Fixed the shading, was too sharp or something😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:27, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

As a WindClan cat, he needs short fur. 04:49, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

He's a thick-furred cat...😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:52, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Thick-furred does not mean long-furred. 04:57, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

That's embarrassing😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 04:58, February 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

To back up what Bluestar said; unless they are specifically called a "long-furred WindClan cat" or a "short-furred RiverClan cat", they should be short for WindClan and long for RiverClan, due to multiple statements in the series about their pelt lengths. Also, please stop aligning and thumbing your images.

As for the image itself; smooth out the shading a lot, give the eye white, and swap the tail shading; the source you have would have the tail shading on the other end, I do believe.

Is there a pupil? Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 16:53, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste behind the hind legs and around the tail 19:20, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

I think it needs the shading to be lightened quite a bit too. <span style="">13:42, 2/24/2017

Re-uploaded! Not entirely happy with the shading though....😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 03:33, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

There is a very tiny bit of waste between the tail and the back. Also, the shading could still be lightened. :) 03:35, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Still working on the haunch shading😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 14:31, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

I think the tail shading should be flipped to <--- this side of the tail, and it could stand to be defined some more on the legs. <span style="">19:35, 2/28/2017

Define the eye depth, and I believe there's leaking shading throughout the image. 19:39, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I'm not the greatest at shading and such, but I did darken it a bit😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 22:16, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reedstar (L) ~ For Approval
what is this thing you call a 'classic tabby'  <span style="">19:39 Wed Feb 22 

Smudge/blur the <- earpink 20:32, February 22, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded  <span style="">09:48 Thu Feb 23 

Define the shading on the front legs. I love the shading tint, by the way. 15:33, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

reups Thanks =D  <span style="">13:29 Mon Feb 27 

Could you define the shading depth a tiny bit on the tail so it doesn't seem too flat? <span style="">19:35, 2/28/2017

Sweetbriar (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Can't believe I actually did this! I'm a beginner don't judge me. Also I want to know how you guys do those signatures so pretty. BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 17:44, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Looks pretty good for your first image! Although, since it's your first, we need the title to be 'For Evaluation' instead of 'For Approval'. Also this needs to be reserved on the charart table. As for the image itself, the shading needs to be smoothed out more, and it looks like you're missing lineart on the eyes. Try overlapping the current lineart onto the existing image, and that should fix it. Try to blend the earpink a little more and maybe use a little more pinkish-gray color instead of orange. Technically all colors need to be colorpicked from the existing images, and how you do that is you save one of the older images and open that into the art program and colorpick from the places you need to color that specific area. In terms of stripe placement, it needs quite a bit more, and I believe there is texture, or that's probably just the stripes smudged. Sorry if this is a wall of text. ;-; <span style="">17:59, 2/23/2017

Sorry for double post, but the shading is leaking in some areas along the image, and the nose needs to be colored in. If you ever need any help, don't hesitate to ask! I'd be more than happy to help you out with image creation. Just gimme a shout on my talk page :) <span style="">18:00, 2/23/2017

Heh, I'm not that pleased with the final product. Thanks, though. I can't get to the editing yet, because i'm working on a school project. :( I will try to get to it, though. Thanks again BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 18:31, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

You're amazing at the stripes! Even I can't do stripes properly yet. Mind defining the eye depth?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:19, February 24, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

reuploaded BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 00:58, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink, and give the shading more shape so it isn't a straight line across the body. Curve it along the face and same with the other parts. The apprentice tutorials are lots of help. :) 01:01, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you know how to use the smudge tool? If so, everything still needs to be smudged: the shading, stripes, and white parts. It also appears you're trying to do things on one layer. Do you know how to use layers? If not, I suggest asking one of the other members here to show you how to do an image like that, specifically on a stream. <span style="">01:10, 2/24/2017

The layers were a bit of a hassle. When I tried to use them, my paint tool, Paint.NET shipped it out as one layer. . . so, not really the best option for me. Also I use pixlr and I still haven't got the hang of it. >:( BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 06:06, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you know of a program called Paint Tool SAI? It's actually a lot easier and more nifty to use than Paint.NET. You could download the free trial and get started :) It's a lot better <span style="">13:37, 2/24/2017

reuploaded 17:57 February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd for the kit? The colors look a little off and the images have texture. <span style="">18:53 Fri Feb 24

You nees to use layers, Starlight. Your lineart is blurred in many places. Please, if you need help, don't hesitate to ask. <span style="">19:39, 2/24/2017

Yep, I need help. For some reason I can't use layers primarily because of the weird way my art progam works. I might need to get a different art program. Also the apprentice tutorials aren't really helping me. And before anyone asks, I can get very busy during weekdays. So bombarding me with all you got is not the best way to go. 21:36 Feb 24, 2017

Define the eye depth, and smooth the shading on the front legs and tail

reuploaded --BlazeclawXAshfall (talk) 06:23, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I think the nose pink should be a bit brighter to match the kit's. And smooth out and add some more texture. 16:25, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

There seem to be lighter lines (probably just erased marks) on the stripes that shouldn't be there, and the stripes on the queen and kit don't look quite as blurred, maybe sharpen them a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:36, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

There should only be three colors for the pelt: The white, the base, and the stripes. It appears that you have an additional shade in there within the stripes that shouldn't be there. The texture is also beneath the stripes, placed much closer together and darker in color. I'm gonna guess those lighter lines are texture. If you want the HEX codes for the colors, don't hesitate to ask me. I'm also having trouble seeing the markings at all under the shading. <span style="">22:31 Mon Feb 27

Yep. Can I have the HEX codes? I really need to redo this somehow. . . --BlazeclawXAshfall (talk) 23:31, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Base: 947455 ; Stripes: 3b2618 ; White: FFFFFF ; Ear pink/Nose: 3b2618 ^ There ya go. The texture is two layers with the same color as the stripes with lowered opacity (77%). Hopefully this helps ^^ <span style="">23:43 Mon Feb 27

Can I have the HEX for the eyes? Also, you made a mistake with the Ear pink/Nose part. It's the same as the stripes. :P So maybe the fixed HEX for that as well? BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:04 2/28/17

There also seems to be a layer of sharp lines scattered on top of the image - could you smooth those out?

b58d8e <-- There is the correct one. Sorry 'bout that. My computer is sometimes a little glitchy from the programs I have to run for my research and whatnot. And the eyes are good how they are now, just need a little depth is all. <span style="">01:14 Tue Feb 28

re-up Should I smudge the texture? I'm not sure about that. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:04 2/28/17

Yeah it looks too solid. Also, smudge/blur the ear pink too.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:41, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Heh, it still doesn't look good. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 03:14 3/1/17

Smudge the earpink?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:57, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Silverpaw (TPB) (A) ~ CBA
Hopefully I did em some justice <span style="">22:18, 2/23/2017

Nice! Can you lighten up the shading a bit on her right ear? 05:51, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">13:36, 2/24/2017

I can't make out the earpink in <--- ear. 15:31, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't really wanna lighten it anymore, because then it'd be too light. <span style="">19:47, 2/25/2017

CBA?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:42, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Prickleface (MC) - For Approval
~Patch   feather~   14:05, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Could you darken the shading around the belly area and on the left hind leg? (the one that's in the shadows)  ~BlazeclawXAshfur   (User talk:StarlightGirlHSS) 17:53 February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  ~Patch    feather~   13:21, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. Sorry, I uploaded the wrong file. ~Patch   feather~   13:33, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly define the shading on the front legs? <span style="">19:36, 2/28/2017

Re-uploaded. I also darkened the shading on the face a little. ~Patch   feather~   14:38, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Mist Where Sunlight Shimmers (PH) ~ For Approval
This is my fourth image, first ph. IDK if the speckles are too light...if so, any tips? :D 05:56, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Don't align your images. Also, define the speckles, earpink, and shading. 06:03, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry about the alignment, I am not able to change it on my computer so I have to go to my tablet each time I upload, and it's very late at night so I was lazy. Otherwise, I'll mostly define the shading everywhere but the main body, as I see it perfectly fine there. Tomorrow. And, again, any tips on defining the speckles? 06:21, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe try cdcdcd for the base and ffbc66 for the speckles. 06:34, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. Its looks a bit flat. It is also leaking on the belly by the hind leg. <span style="">14:31 Sat Feb 25

This should have mud on it, if I'm not mistaken. 15:29, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:57, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

If you look at the other prey hunter images, there's a loooooot more mud on it. How's a kitty s'posed to be camouflaged if he's only got a few mud specks on em? :P <span style="">21:10, 2/25/2017

Reuploaded -- 21:45, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the ginger speckles? I can't tell the difference between them and the mud very well

Reuploaded -- 03:03, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add or define some depth to the shading? 05:24, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

can you make the mud more splotchy or add more or smth it looks like brown patches right now 15:31, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:41, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:32, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I can see it fine? Second opinion? 22:17, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to darken it. It would probably also help with it looking flat. <span style="">22:33 Mon Feb 27

Reuploaded -- 23:59, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth? Also idk if it's just me, but the ginger specks seem to be the exact same color throughout and some are untouched by the shading. Is this intentional? If so, I highly suggest moving the specks below the shading layer. <span style="">19:37, 2/28/2017

I'll do that in a bit, but can someone just explain what the shading depth is again? It's not seeming to change. Also, Snow, you said "exact same colour throughout," does that mean you'd like me to change the color of the speckles or just the color of the ones in the shaded areas? Thanks :) 21:47, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

the shading should be much darker near the lineart and gradient out into the base colour, whereas this shading is the same throughout. something like that. 21:53, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:38, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Beechfur (TC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Not sure about this. At least I'm not doing a gray/black cat again. 20:39, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Lighteb him up a bit. I thought he was black. 23:07, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 01:48, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more. Without zooming in, it looks dark gray. 01:53, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 02:31, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tail a bit. 15:26, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading, it looks very flat. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:48, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 02:58, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Willownose (Queen) ~ For Evaluation
Джулия де Мортон (talk) 12:11, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice. Taper the ends on the stripes a little bit and define the light on the legs. <span style="">15:18 Sun Feb 26

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 15:54, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Add some shading in the ears? 16:30, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 18:20, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and add a little bit of depth? 23:06, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:07, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the face, it kinda looks like there's no shading on the cheek closest to us😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 18:07, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The cheek is fine, but can you define the depth? 11:22, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:24, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the --> back paw? Looks really sharp on my screen

Morningflower (Star) - For Evalutation
hecho en photoshop, fue un imagen dificíl... quien inventado esta textura? Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:41, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

realizé había debido reservar esto imagen en la pagína frente... lo siento. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:43, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Please only speak english on this wiki. <span style="">13:05, 2/26/2017

Define/Darken the shading. Very pretty! 16:10, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

This looks beautiful! Could you darken the pupils, they look grey to me. — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  16:18, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you all. I darkened the shading. I'll darken the pupils later. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 02:37, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading needs to be darkened more. I cannot see it. <span style="">02:52, 2/27/2017

how's this? Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 13:51, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define it a bit more. And don't forget to say reuploaded or some variation of that every time you re-upload it. 16:24, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I think the whole image should be darkened a bit to match the other Morningflower images. — ☆ paper  ·  finches  ★  16:46, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink?

I reuploaded it and did everything everyone suggested :] Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:25, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

I really think the shading needs to be darkened quite a lot more. <span style="">19:38, 2/28/2017

Can you darken or add shading if there's any? I can't make it out😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 21:20, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Broken Foot, don't repeat what other have said. As for the image, define the earpink. 23:27, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Is it against the rules or something? Anyways, maybe darken the pupil, it doesn't look exactly black.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:40, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

I'm not entirely sure it's against the rules, but it's a bit ... offputting (is that the right word?) to have something be said twice during the same re-uploading period. <span style="">03:44, 3/01/2017

I reuploaded! I'm sure Broken Foot just accidentally didn't see the comment above... ;w; anyway, I darkened the shading!! I apologize massively if it seemed like I didn't do so previously- I really tried ! ouo maybe it's because of this stupid tortoiseshell pattern... Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 12:22, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Parsnip (KP) - For Approval
Yes, he is a Savannah hybrid <3 I saw his description and couldn't resist. <span style="">23:46 Mon Feb 27

I love the spots. What tool did you use to make them? :) Can you smoothen out the shading? 23:50, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the haunch furthest from us? Eaglestorm1 (talk) 23:51, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks (: Sadly there's no trick with custom brushes on this one. Just a 3px brush with pen pressure using a tablet, and a reference image of a Savannah cat. No smudging required either 'cause of the short fur ^^ <span style="">00:50 Tue Feb 28

Star (KM) ~ For Approval
ehhhh...

This is probably tiny but the chin on the other image is orange. 00:27, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Lighten the light in the eyes a bit- Wildthorn34 (talk) 01:27, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 20:13, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The eyes are the same colors as the CG image, and they're above the shading and everything, so I'd rather not lighten them.

Robinstar (L) ~ For Evaluation
Eaglestorm1 (talk) 00:55, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth and the eye depth?

Smooth the shading and define it on the tail. <span style="">01:15 Tue Feb 28

Re-up Eaglestorm1 (talk) 01:31, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

For a beginner, this is not bad. Blur the texture a bit?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 02:17, February 28, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

May I get a second opinion. I am pretty sure you don't have to blur texture... 02:35, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading on the belly, legs, and chest. I think the texture is fine. 02:39, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

I had agreed with Wolf, I'm pretty sure Troll does it. Thanks Vet :3 Eaglestorm1 (talk) 02:43, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Make the tail more ginger; I honestly thought it was light brown/golden-brown. 03:44, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

textures fine but it's supposed to be a bit soft like fur, so maybe blur (or smudge) it a small bit. it is a little sharp. 20:47, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

This needs to be reserved.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:54, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Spiderpelt (W) ~ For Approval
23:37, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Maybe define the shading on the four paws a little bit? 23:40, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  23:45, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail. 23:50, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

 Reups  23:53, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Lighen him up. He looks too dark to be silver. Also, define the tail shading more, as well the earpink. 23:57, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  00:12, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head? 16:09, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Robinwing (WC) (Star) ~ Declined
Please someone make it transparent. Also this is my first so i admit im not the best.

Really we can't make it transparent. What you do (At least for GIMP) is save the blank to the computer, than open it on the program, that makes it Transparent. This also needs to be renames Robinwing (WC).star. As for the image there are two white pixels in the leg closest to us. 02:06, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think she has been confirmed to be in StarClan. 02:19,  March 1, 2017 (UTC) ​ ​

​I could make it transparent for you, but first, could you smudge the earpink?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 02:25, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

2 things: in gimp to delete the white background is add alpha channel > dleete it I think, and 2. she hasn't been confirmed as starclan, so this will be declined. 02:48, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry but I have to decline this. No StarClan cite has been confirmed, so no StarClan image. <span style="">03:39, 3/01/2017

Thrushwing (Q) ~ For Approval
02:45, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Wildthorn34 (talk) 02:47, March 1, 2017 (UTC) Ohh! do i like i think its fine but add a little color to the nose.

Idk if it's me but the right eye looks like it's a lazy eye, maybe shift it <- this way a bit more? 02:48, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

i think the eye looks ok, can i get a second opinion? and then nose isn't supposee to be filled on these blanks. 14:27, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eye is fine. And the nose on the queen blanks does not need to be filled in unless they're specifically said to have a color in their nose, like bright pink <span style="">14:39, 3/01/2017

Deerfoot (DF) ~ For Approval
First Dark Forest image. Not entirely happy with this, but, oh well. 03:04, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's me or not, but the brown almost looks reddish?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 03:11, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded. Color picked from Spikefur. 03:15, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

(Ignore me if its fine) But define the shading on  the tail?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:55, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded. Btw, do the eyes seem washed out to anyone else? They're bright on the file, but whenever I reupload, they turn to a pale, almost white color. 15:43, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

I'm seeing an almost white color on my phone.

Reuploaded. This is the best I can get it. 20:38, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (RC) (Star) ~ For Approval
18:00, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading everywhere but the front half of the cat? <span style="">19:24, 3/01/2017