Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Burr
In the Warriors Adventure Game setting The Plaintive Howls, there is a rogue named Burr. I think this cat should get it's individual page. He should be considered a character, but because how he appears....I don't know if we should add him. Comments? 11:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it counts. If characters from The Warriors App count, this should too. 23:33, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Agreeable, but does he have a description?

Nevermind. That is PCA's job. But if other characters from the app have characters, so should he.

PCA's job is to provide characters with art, not a description. ;) 05:39, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty sure he's a Tom....should we go ahead and make the page? 19:01, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

He should get a page, but due to him being a non-canonicity character, we need to decide what his page would look like as we have none non-canonicity characters so far. 04:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I think we could still format it out regularly, like Nutmeg's. 10:42, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

And yet Nutmeg is a canon character. Burr is non-canon. 13:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think he should still have a history section. For his "appearance" xD 00:00 Thu Feb 9

I agree he should get a page. it could have a main quote (if appliable), a description, then the spoiler warning, then the history with book mentions, then a trivia, then character pixels (if appliable), then quotes (if appliable), and end of spoiler warning. For the history, it could have "Fading Echoes" in replace of the "In the Omen of the Stars Series" (check in source mode to see what it said << there), and then "The Plaintive Howls" in replace of "Fading Echoes", then the history will start as usuall. 06:06, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

DJ, you made a typo with the category link, so I fixed it. Anyways, yes, Burr should still get a page. If the characters from the App get one, so does Burr. Also, how is Burr not a canon character? He wasn't fanmade, but instead created by HC for the Warriors Adventure games. If you ask me, that's still canon, since it's technically part of the Warriors universe. 06:14, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I view it as the Warriors Adventure Games are like role-play, plus the games are created by Stan! It's debatable, but if we are to make a page I'd view it as "In the Warriors Adventure Game"; "The Plaintive Howls". There would probably be no need for quotes and art. 02:11, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Regardless of who they're created by, HarperCollins published them in an actual Warriors book (erm..books xD). If it wasn't considered a part of the series, then why in the world would they be put into the back of an official book? Yes, it might count as some form of RP, and what you said would be a good idea. If it wasn't meant to be part of the series, then it probably would have only gone on that blasted "official website".... instead of in the books. I don't even consider that website official, run by HC or not... 02:16, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Well, maybe we could put up a "non-canon banner" and list the page as a stub until we have all necessary info. Would he still be treated like he was a minor character in the series? 20:10, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

We're probably never going to be able to fill in all the nessecary info due to short introduction in the game. I would say he's a minor character because depending on whoever plays the game, then it's their jurisdiction. 23:12, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Translated Character Names?
I know it's weird to see me making a proposal for a project I don't belong to, but hear me out. I'd like to propose that the translations of each character's name be added to a new section in each character article. It could just be at the bottom, in a chart that listed the language in one column and the translated names in another. I think it could be interesting, and I know we have members of this wiki that speak a language other than English primarily. In fact, to start off I have the names of most of the characters in German and English right here, here, here, here, here, here, and here. Just an idea. Putting it out there. 15:48, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think it'd be a great addition to the character articles. 16:00 Mon Jan 30

I think it's a good idea. 16:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. How many languages will be do? It seems like a good idea, though. 23:43, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It makes sense to me.

Probably all of those available if we do this. Honestly, I'm not sure about doing this due to the problem of having unknowing users and/or anons adding in names that could've come straight from google translate, or misleading us by putting something inaccurate in another language. Also, there are hundreds of characters, most minor characters, that might not be worth bothering with due to the fact that this is an English wiki. However, I would find the how the names differ from English interesting, and I do think this idea is intriguing, but there's also the alternative option of just expanding the Warriors Translations page. 23:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Atelda, there are so many characters, and we might as well just expand the Warriors Translations page. It is an interesting suggestion though. 04:55, Tue, Jan, 31, 2012

Maybe just list main and major characters on the translations page? Really, it's quite fascinating. Rusty was called Sammy in German. :3 04:59, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think taking the chart and separating the characters from it onto another chart would be the most helpful. The entire page could use some organization, but I think that would fall at least in part to Project Reality. 21:32, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I was thinking about that as well. Just make a new page containing the different translations of warrior names. The page could also fall into Project:World ^^. 23:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I agree. If this is going into another project, then we should discuss this on either PR or PW's talk page. 00:33, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Except it isn't. The translations of character names would still technically fall to us. I just pointed out that the rest of the page could be brought up to snuff by other projects as well. 00:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

We could put in the trivia, saying, "in this version, he/She was called this name" or something like that. 18:59, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Nah, I think it would work best either exclusively on the translations page or in a new section on every page. The easiest thing to do would be the translations page, of course. 19:47, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

It'd be better organized in a template, or in another section. For now, I'd say we add another translations page of which would just feature names. Other opinions? 04:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I really should rejoin this project sometime.... I think you should make another section for it. Like on Bulbapedia, for any of you pokemon fans, they have a whole section for the name of the pokemon or character in different languages. I think it'd be the most logical thing to do. I think listing them somewhere is a great idea though. :) 03:58, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Join us grammy I think making a new section would be a good idea. 16:52 Sun Feb 12

Again, I bring up the fact that we have an extensive amount of characters in the series. I'm still skeptical about having another section for the characters due to the incompleteness it'd be for a long while. Once we've used up the internet to find the names in other languages, we'd be leaving many characters without that name section, and leave it up to those one or two users from other countries who are active. Perhaps I'm overestimating on the amount of work that is needed to get this done, and underestimating on how much of that work will get done. 17:07, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, couldn't we just use something like google translate?

Nope. The names truly depend on how the translator adopts the name into another language. Take Squirrelflight's name in German for example. In German, her name is Eichhornschweif. Translate that through Google Translate and you get "suirrel's tail". 23:42, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. Guess that's out of the picture then. Personally, I think this would be a good thing to do once the books are done being released or when the project is slow. It wouldn't really be a good idea to do it now.

Sunpelt (LC) ~ Silver Nomination
-has been meaning to do this- I added the only quotes I could find and changed all past tense words to present tense words, seeing as that's how most articles and character pages are written...Comments? 04:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Good job! I think you should change the main quote to another quote, as main quotes are supposed to show the character's personality or characteristics, and that main quote doesn't really show, and it's kinda plain. 05:35, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I re-wrote the main text of the article so it flows better. It had way too many grammatical errors. Hope that helps. 05:43, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Expand SotC please. 16:34 Wed Feb 1

I don't think SotC can be expanded much further without repeating the story word-for-word. It goes over everything that happens. 16:42, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes? And personally, I think the extra quote you have ("You have done a great service for the forest") would be a better main quote. But the history looks good. 17:22, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I switched the quotes around. I'll look for more quotes now. :) 03:30, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Did'ya get them quotes in there Willowfern? (: 00:20 Sat Feb 18

It looks good to me. Nice job.

Silverpaw (BotC) ~ Silver Nomination
I couldn't find any quotes on him/her, and I believe it looks pretty good. Comments? 20:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand and detail her appearence please. 21:46 Thu Feb 2

Her appearance is unknown. 22:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a quote, it can even be the narrator. I think I remember Silverstream talking/saying something to Silverpaw, so I think that could work as a quote. 08:25, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

In BoTC page 38, it quotes: "Intruders, Silverpaw? Are you sure?", and that's her only appearance in the book. 17:07, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I added it in. 22:48 Mon Feb 13

However, does that really describe her personality? And if it doesn't, then should it really be on the character's article? 23:12, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I think. 01:57, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

How does she respond? That may or may not say something on her personality. 13:59, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

She doesn't respond. 14:00, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Then CBV? 00:10, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 22:42, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tanglewhisker ~ Silver Nomination
Hey guys! I completely expanded his history in Crookedstar's Promise, and finished up his quotes. I can't honestly find a quote that defines his personality enough to make it his main one, but if you guys think I should then I will. Thanks for reading, I hope he gets silver. 22:23, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, this probably needs a main quote. You've done a good job with his history; maybe try combining some of the paragraphs? 23:44, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good, just dropped by to say I gave him bronze status, seeing as it was started before. ;3 23:49 Sun Feb 5

Yay Bronze! I'll combine some of the paragraphs and attempt to find a main quote right now. Thanks guys. C: 1:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more descriptive quote descriptions. (See the first quote description in his quote section). 00:53 Thu Feb 9

Done. :3 03:24, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks very good. CBV? 23:43, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 22:42, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur ~ Silver Nomination
Okay, this is my first page nomination... well, the only concern listed was the fact that he needed Heart of a Warrior added in, so I took care of that. Otherwise, it has plenty of quotes, everything is cited, and it seems to be well-written. Anything else? (kinda fumbling around here, hope I did this right) 19:44, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

You did it right. :) If you can, possibly expand The Sight and Night Whispers. Other than that, this looks great! 04:50, Tue, Feb, 7, 2012

Expand Sunset and the Forgotten Warrior too please. 00:12 Wed Feb 8

Also expand Battles of the Clans. Looks good! 08:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you work on Secrets of the Clans? It looks nice. 03:17, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Alright. I just need to check out those books tomorrow and I'll get right on it. 16:39, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I've expanded the field guides and The Sight, but could someone tell me if I need to trim those down before I move on? I kinda just went through and added nearly every place where he's mentioned, and I feel I may have to paraphrase a bit more than I did. 03:05, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind. I went ahead and expanded all of those sections as much as possible. There wasn't much to add to Night Whispers or Sunset, though. Anything else? 05:23, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you give a little more detail to the quotes? Moreso quotes two, four and five. 05:23, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I expanded all but the Dark River quote. I couldn't do much with that one, anyway, even if I had the book on me. Yeah, it's short, but it does describe Brackenfur's personality as a mentor pretty well. 15:20, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Expand Into the Wild?

I'm pretty sure the Into the Wild section has everything on him there is in the book. He's not even named in that book, just kidnapped and retrieved. 15:26, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. Everything looks good to me.

CBV? 22:35, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart - Gold Nomination
Because the the forum wasn't very specific in what was needed to expand in her article, I was unsure what to expand, but I expanded a few sections. Comments? 00:30, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Expand Sign of the Moon if possible.

Darn, I was gonna do this. ;3 Expand Firestar's Quest, Midnight, Dawn, Sunset and Outcast, if you can. 8D 00:44 Thu Feb 9

Maybe add another quote if possible?

If you can expand Forest of Secrets, Starlight, Dark River, Eclipse, Sunrise and The Fourth Apprentice. If you can't I understand. We are throwing a lot at you. 02:16, Sun, Feb, 12, 2012

Sign of the Moon and all the books Sweet mentioned are done. I did the last bit of expanding on Forest of Secrets a few minutes ago. Onto the rest of what DJ said. x3 02:47, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Cab you possibly detail The Lost Warrior a bit more? 18:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

"Cab", lol. :P Anyways, did that^^ and expanded what you said, DJ. 00:55, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing ~ Silver Nomination
Icewing <33 Gotta love that name! Comments? <span style="">23:34 Fri Feb 10

Are there any quotes that could be added in? Also, I know she wasn't mentioned too much, but can you try to expand her history a bit more? Nice job! -- 01:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'll try to expand her history and find some quotes. <span style="">01:41 Sat Feb 11

To extend on what Stoneclaw said, try and expand the Sign of the Moon and The Forgotten Warrior sections if possible. 01:42, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'll expand tomorrow, once I have a chnace to re-read those two books real quick tonight. <span style="">02:25 Sat Feb 11

I can't expand SoTM, but I'll see if I can expand TFW. <span style="">15:52 Sat Feb 11

I expanded SoTM by a few words and it looks like TFW is expanded to the max. I added a main quote. <span style="">00:10 Sat Feb 18

CBV? 00:11, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 22:42, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw ~ Silver Nomination
I added a quote (The only quote I could find in the browse inside XD)

If anyone has the two books she's in, and can find an epic quote, I'll probably be very grateful, because I have got no money to buy the book yet XD.

And since I'm pretty new to this, I was wondering a couple things (I was wondering if she needs to be bronze first before being Silver XD) A star, a star, <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#8B0A50"> dancing in the sky...   01:37, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, it needs to be bronze first. :P Hmm...Look for a main quote, also, (IMO) the quote you have now describes Sol more. 01:40, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

IMO? Confused face. Okay, I can TRY and get the book, and find something better for the main quote XD.I can't garuntee I can get it though, as I am looking for a job, and failing epically XD A star, a star, <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#8B0A50"> dancing in the sky...   01:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion. ;3 I'll try to find some quotes also. <span style="">01:52 Sat Feb 11

Detail the overall history some more if you can. Or possibly smoothen the history out, it seems somewhat choppy to me. 02:08, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I added a quote for ya. <span style="">02:17 Sat Feb 11

I probably can't add more history yet, since I don't have the books, I could probably smoothen it out though A star, a star, <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#8B0A50"> dancing in the sky...   03:01, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Done smoothing out the history? 02:06, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm working on it, I've been busy with school and stuff. A star, a star, <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#8B0A50"> dancing in the sky...  01:16, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Also, could you be a bit more specific on what you mean by smoothen out, because the history looks fine to me (She isn't seen very much except in the two books X) A star, a star, <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#8B0A50"> dancing in the sky...   14:49, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneclaw ~ Silver Nomination
W00t! I got Stoneclaw (an epic character, you know why ;))! Well, for being such a minor character, his artcile seems good, and I gave him bronze status. Comments? 02:01, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneclaw, an epic character? Pshaw, expand his article if you can. <span style="">02:05 Sat Feb 11

Huh. He IS epic. >.> xDDD Done that, comments? 02:18, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

xDD Quotes please! ;3 <span style="">02:24 Sat Feb 11

Done, he doesn't actually say anything. x3 -- 03:15, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 00:13, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 22:42, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Dark Shadow on Water - Silver Nomination
Hmm...I worked on it before, then kinda forgot about it, and tonight, out of boredom, I decided to nominate it. :3 Anyway, I added a main quote, expanded Sign of the Moon, and added regular quotes - ones that I thought described him...So, comments? o3o 02:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the article if you can. <span style="">02:14 Sat Feb 11

Also, maybe try to detail his article some more along with expanding. 21:18, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

If you can, could you choose a main quote that describes his personality just a bit more? If not, its fine. :3  18:52, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I couldn't really find a way to detail or expand it, but, I think I've found a better main quote. 04:45, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

His page looks good.

Silverpaw (OS) ~ Silver Nomination
I managed to detail it a bit, but it's a really minor character. Comments? 09:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

History looks good. The only thing I'd suggest is that you see if you can find that quote from Rising Storm, which is obviously the only time he appears. 20:05, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Er...Sorry about that...I don't have the book, so can someone help me with that? 02:05, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Try using google books. <span style="">18:11 Sun Feb 19

Done. She isn't in Rising Storm, and I found only one quote from Secrets of the Clans. 00:52, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Talonpaw - Silver Nomination
He's always stuck out in my mind for some reason. I added quotes last night (I'll check for any others, but I don't think there are) and I'm on my way to work on Twilight. So, comments? 13:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Would it be possible to expand Starlight a little? You could explain what his patrol did when they found Brambleclaw across the border. 17:05, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Done. 22:28, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Expand Twilight more if you can. <span style="">23:48 Sun Feb 12

I detailed it. 00:39, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Looks excellent. But, was Talonpaw ever seen speaking himself? If he did actually speak, I suggest adding a dialogue quote of him speaking, because the only quotes he has are of others talking about him. 03:40, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

He never said anything. Poor thing never got a word in edgewise. o3o 01:03, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hollowflight - Silver Nomination
Right, then, I've had my eye on him for a while now. Quotes are on the way. Suggestions? 23:40, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Expand The Forgotten Warrior, Sign of the Moon and Night Whispers if you can. Looks nice! <span style="">23:46 Sun Feb 12

Thanks, Sweet! I expanded them as much as I could. 00:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Did you get the quotes in? 04:07, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. 21:15, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I changed the main quote. No offense, but I didn't really like the other one; I have no idea why. The alternative to what I have now is, "The RiverClan cat was not the nervous apprentice she had tried to help when he first came to the Dark Forest a moon ago. He had learned a lot since then, and his movements were strong and sure." But, if no one wants that instead, I'm leaving it as is. 03:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Birdsong ~ Silver Nomination
Yay for my first nomination! 8D I expanded the history as much as possible, and added a ton of quotes. Comments? 11:53, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

The history looks pretty good, but as for quotes, I suggest you delete a few as some of them do not describe her personality. 23:16, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Which ones? Sorry, I'm horrible at picking quotes. XD 17:39, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think quotes one, two and five should be deleted. They don't really show her personality. Of course, that's just my opinion. =3 18:54, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Done. :) 12:28, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Falcon Swoop ~ Silver Nomination
'kay, let's try this one again, shall we? She doesn't appear much, so there's not a lot to work with when it comes to detail. 02:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. Possibly add a description to the quote in the Quote section. 21:29, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Done. I don't need to attack the history on this one, since I re-wrote it last time I nominated it...and it got declined 'cause I had internet issues. 21:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Any other quotes for her? Otherwise her page looks good to me. •Cheshire• ♣Happy St. Patrick's Day!♣ 00:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

This page is already on the CBV list. Plus, I can't add anything else for her. I've already looked multiple times. 00:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

(Headdesk) Sorry about that. •Cheshire• ♣Happy St. Patrick's Day!♣ 00:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Brook ~ Silver Nomination
Her article looks good, but I know it could be improved. That's why I'm re-writing her history. =D Comments? 20:08, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Woo, re-writing history ftw. Any more quotes? 04:24, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'll find one or two while rewriting the history. I'm really fond of the one she has as her main quote, so I don't think I'll change that, unless the others agrees. 04:27, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, no, I like the main quote too, it describes her well. And just whenever you can, about the other quotes, and if you can find any good ones. 04:38, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I've taken care of Moonrise, Dawn, Twilight, Eclipse and Cats of the Clans. I think Sunset looks fine, and I'll tackle The Sight, Dark River and Outcast in the morning. Comments so far? 07:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I've rewritten her entire history, save for Sunset (I think it's fine), and the quotes that were already there look good enough to me. Anyone have any comments? 04:19, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

It looks great as far as history. I have no critisizm for this. 04:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Neither do I. CBV? 02:39, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me.

Maple, you can't CBV votes...only the leads can...xD 02:41, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I am a derp, never mind. I had NO clue you were an SW. 02:42, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

She's a Senior Warrior.

I'm actually going to put this on the CBV list because there are other nominations that were nominated before this that are also ready for vote. 23:53, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Merry - Silver Nomination
I rewrote her history, nothing I can really expand or detail upon, I added the only quote that really described her personality. Comments? 21:12, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any other quotes? Looks amazing! 8D 23:31, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. CBV? 12:40, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Same with this one ^^. (Also, no more quotes). 23:53, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oakfur ~ Silver Nomination
Weell, the votes ended, and I managed to get this to load so... I love this dude, he's pretty awesome :P Comments? (I'll get another quote if I can) <span style="">23:26 Fri Feb 17

Psh, he's from ShadowClan, of course he's awesome. xD Could you possibly expand Sunset and Twilight? 04:33, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Of course! Because all ShadowClan cats are epic! But I can't expand either of them. <span style="">18:58 Sun Feb 19

Running Fox ~ Silver Nomination
Awww! I just love the name Running Fox, reminds me of the cute foxes in our bush. ;3 Well, I can't expand the history becuase of his extrememly minor appearence, and he can't speak, so I doubt he has any quotes. x3 Comments? <span style="">00:01 Sat Feb 18

Kind of hate to ask, but can you detail the history at all? If you can't, never mind. 04:26, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

If you can, can you add a quote from the narrator, if there is one. Looks great! 23:30, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, you made me look through the book and I expanded SoTM a lot. :P I'll start on LS in a moment. I'm adding one quote now, and the other ones that I found don't really describe him even if it is a dialouge quote. <span style="">18:21 Sun Feb 19

Frogleap ~ Silver Nomination
I added bronze status to him...Comments? There isn't to much to expand, if I'm not mistaken. 23:33, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Try to see if a couple more quotes can be found. Perhaps some dialogues? They really help tie the article together. Also, in the history, I've noticed incredibly vague phrases such as "Frogleap is seen with Loudbelly tracking through the reedbed." Why are they in the reed bed? Try to see if you can expand on these kinds of phrases without detracting too much from Frogleap himself. 00:23, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Moonflight--try to expand/detail the article where you can. Near the end, the history says something like, "Frogleap is seen rushing into battle, but he is pushed back by Hailstar." Could you explain which battle Frogleap was rushing into and detail that whole paragraph in particular? 01:29, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I added another dialogue quote, and fixed up the history (I read the book, and the history was mess up on the article), and detailed most of it. 06:18, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Owlstar - Silver Nomination
Haven't done this in a while. All he really needed was some quotes. 13:40, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks great.

Pineclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I think he looks good. I'll try to find a quote or two more if there are any. Comments? 14:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Expand his history if you can anymore. <span style="">23:12 Sun Feb 19

I added the little more I could find. 15:00, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker ~ Silver Nomination
I believe I am doing this right... It looks as detailed as possible, in my opinion, for such a minor character. ^^ So, any comments? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:59, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you detail the second paragraph in his history a bit more? :3 19:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Add another quote if you can and expand his appearance. <span style="">23:04 Wed Feb 22

I read the article, and I find that the history's somewhat choppy. Can you try to smooth out the history? If you can't, it's fine, it might be just me. -- 03:43, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I'm having a little trouble getting the book, but I'll have it hopefully by Monday :x I'll work on smoothing out the paragraph, but the quotes and detail might have to wait a bit. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽  18:20, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart ~ Silver Nomination
I worked a lot on his article, and I think he's ready. :) Comments? 18:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...looks good, Misty. For Starlight, could you possibly expand on he and the rest of the patrol did when they confronted Brambleclaw? Also, can you find another quote? Try looking in Battles of the Clans, if you can. 18:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Added a new quote, and expanded as much as I could into Starlight. 18:44, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you still try expanding Battles of the Clans some more? 04:51, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Expanded Battles of the Clans as much as I could. 02:06, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I worked on her article a bit more, and here she is. Comments? 01:34, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Whoop whoop! Go females with -claw in their name! :3 Expand The Rescue and is it possible to find one or two more quotes? Otherwise it looks fine.

Is there a main quote that describes her personality more, like one of the ones that said she was a good warrior despite being a kittypet? 05:17, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, Ebonyclaw is awesome. x3 I can't expand The Rescue anymore, sorry. Those were the only times she was mentioned/seen. Switched the main quote and I am now looking for more. (quotes are my worst enemy o.o)  02:07, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Working Revamp
Okay, so I got an idea while looking at another wiki, here. There's a template in the top that says a user is currently working on revamping the article, and only minor edits should be made without permission of that user. If someone wanted to add something, they'd have to contact the user in question. I was thinking we could have these. For example, Shelly is editing and revamping Brackenfur, so we could add it to his article until she's finished. 04:28, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and the text in the template says, ''This article is currently being reworked by USER in order to achieve a better status. We ask that edits to this article are only minor or gramatical in nature until this warning is removed, in order to not disrupt the major revamp. Should you wish to participate in the revamp, please contact the editor at work.'' There's a link to the user's talk page where it says, "the editor at work". 04:30, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

That wouldn't be half bad of an idea. Case and point for me: I just rewrote almost all of Brook's history. I wouldn't want a user coming in and messing up what I worked hard on. I mean, it may seem like a user is "claiming" an article, but, it would cause less edit conflicts. 8D 04:31, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

You know, I really like this idea. I support this. Good idea, Oblivion! 04:35, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I support this idea too. I agree with everything that has been said above ^^ 04:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, good point Oblivion! Could we also have a thing where if 2+ users are working on it together, it could say "This article is currently being reworked by USERNAME, USERNAME and USERNAME ". I <3 this idea. 8D <span style="">05:16, Mon, Feb, 20, 2012

Great point Loonie! Agreeing what was said 100%. 14:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

This makes sense to me.

Good idea Loonie! :) <span style="">22:54 Thu Feb 23

This is a great idea! I actually wonder why it wasn't brought up before. 09:33, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Macgyver - Silver Nomination
I rewrote some of his history, added a main quote, and three supporting quotes. Comments? 04:45, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try expanding the last paragraph of his history? Looks great! 06:16, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I couldn't find anything to expand on, though, the fact I'm trying to read that part off a nook surely doesn't help. :P 04:10, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly I don't see anything to improve on. Well done!

Runningnose ~ Silver Nomination
So I looked through his history and thought it was pretty good. I also added some quotes last night. Comments? 14:55, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Expand all sections of the history if yu can. <span style="">17:03 Wed Feb 22

I expanded as much as I could. 22:45, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Adding Ages to Character Charts?
Hey everyone~ I'm here to do what I do: make suggestions.

I'm of the opinion that, for characters we have this information on anyway, we should include ages on charcats. (For dead cats, it'd be the age they died at.)

In example, on Firestar's chart it'd say that he is approximately 7 years of age.

We'd only do this for characters we know the ages of, without guessing at it, and doing this would allow us to provide even more information on characters than we already do. Not to mention, with out handy Events Timeline, it'd be a snap.

Comments? 00:15, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

I love this idea Shelly! But of course, only some cats will get ages. You have my support. 00:37, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, only some cats: the major characters. I like this idea. <span style="">00:38, 25, 02, 2012

I like it! 8D Where would it be added though? Just on the Charcat? I think thatd be the best place. And can we just put unknown for the age, rather than leaving it off? Anons will probably eventually start to ask why there's no ages on some, but I think it'd be fine if it just said unknown. But anyways, great idea. ^^ 00:39, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

^^ Yeah. It'l bring up contributive edits for sure. 00:41, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

I like this too! 8D I agree with Paleh for it to be on the charcat. @Rowan, this isn't about getting edits up, but for improving the articles. 00:44, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

-Shall be the pessimistic one- While this is a good idea, don't you think it'd be a bit odd to add in ages of only a few characters, meanwhile about maybe 65% - 75% of the characters would be missing this information? Only few characters would have this available information, thus I'm not convinced of making it a part of a characters article.

There's also the bit about years. Since all character articles use the terms used within the books, wouldn't it be odd to use a "human term"? An easy substitute is that would be using the term, "moon", however that'd also add a bit more precision to our estimates. And even with the timeline, I feel like we'd still be guessing at the age of a particular cat.

Anyways, my little outtake on this idea. Don't get me wrong, it's a great idea, but I don't think we should carry out given the pros and cons presented currently. 03:42, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I understand your concerns, and I'll carefully debunk them in order:

1: How many of our character articles ever have everything there may be to have on them? Some have post-death residence, some don't, all depending on whether or not we actually know where they ended up when they died. This is the same exact concept. Nothing different. Making it a part of the character articles will allow us to provide all of the information we have on characters, which is our job.

2: Sure, we can go with moons if you're concerned about terminology. But I think approx. years or even approx. seasons would work as well. Not everything we do on here has to follow Clan vernacular.

3: Our timeline has the information down as best as we know it, which is the best that the books provide, which is as accurate as it's going to get. We know that Firestar is 7, nearly 8. Dovewing and Ivypool are both 1, nearly 2. When Lionheart died, he was approximately 5.

I still think that this is a good idea, in short. 04:13, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Strange. I suggested this months ago and it got shot down :S  04:37, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

I refuse to be shot down. ಠ益ಠ 04:38, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

XD We all love Shelly's argument mode. But, this is a great idea. In my opinion, this could actually really improve the articles. And maybe, when they find out all these ages, people will stop tormenting Firestar's age xD 09:31, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, Shelly. Dat face. Both Shelly and Atelda have good points. If we decide to go through with this it would be a terrific addition to character pages. 01:31, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sol's Father - Silver Nomination
Sol's father wins Parent of the Year. It isn't like I, uh, already had the information needed for this in the back of my mind thanks to a certain other nomination. Sarcasm aside, I rewrote the history and added quotes. His article was already fairly complete, so...yeah. Let me know if you want me to change the main quote. Comments? 02:00, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sol's Father - Silver Nomination
Sol's father wins Parent of the Year. It isn't like I, uh, already had the information needed for this in the back of my mind thanks to a certain other nomination. Sarcasm aside, I rewrote the history and added quotes. His article was already fairly complete, so...yeah. Let me know if you want me to change the main quote. Comments? 02:00, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry about this, guys, my browser bugged up on me. Dx 02:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Rejoin.
I saw I was removed from the project, but I'd still like to be in it. Can you please put my name back on the list?

Of course, review the guidelines/ FAQ if nessecary. 22:44, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Wing Shadow Over Water ~ Silver Nomination
I kid you not, there is nothing more that can be done with this article. I've maxed out everything, and there are only a few times where she speaks. Comments? 22:26, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

You're right. =) It's all good. 23:18, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Something Of Importance
Hey, everyone. This is pretty important, so you might want to take a read.

I was just going through some articles and I checked Dustpelt's page, seeing that there was a missing citation. I decided, on a whim, to go through and check the other citations to make sure they matched up with the books.

Only one out of six was factual. The rest were fabricated.

This got me paranoid about the citations on the descriptions of every other character page. ... I know it's a big thing to do, but I think the project needs to start the process of going through all of the character pages and checking to validate citations. I'm sorry, it's a big task, but it needs to be done. Withthe whole of the project working on it, it shouldn't be too hard.

Likewise, I think that from here on before a page is given silver status, all citations must be validated by someone other than the person that wrote the up. Just a suggestion. 06:13, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

We should go over all the citations within the articles if there are false references. And it shouldn't be so much of a bother to look at the citations during a nomination. Good point to bring up, Shelly. However, to make sure all citations in the descriptions (and maybe even in the family section) are correctly cited, we need all of the project to help. And a note for citations, it's much easier to use the abbreviated version of the citations, thus why we have the template. 06:22, February 26, 2012 (UTC)