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Mole (Cat) (Star) ~ For Approval
Phew..Wanty, you are one amazing artist to be able to do this. c: Well, I tried my best. c: Comment away! 21:40, October 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think the earpink needs to fill a little more of the ear?

The texture seems to fade when it reaches the shading, and I don't see the light source. Blur the shading and define the pale parts on the rogue. 22:18, October 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My texture looks more amazing then I thought it would. o.o I surprise myself..xD 02:46, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Could you make the chest texture flow more with the body? 03:43, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

And perhaps smudge it and add different layers of varying intensity? As it is, it doesn't appear to match the rouge slightly. You're on the right path though, and it's getting there. Could you also have the shading flow a little better with the shape of the cat? On the haunch, for example, it appears to be a straight line, when I believe it should curve a little more...

I think I see some waste on the far side on the far ear, and there seem to a few lighter areas at the top part of the tail near the tip. Awesome job, though. 14:00, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Oooh, the body texture seems closer to the real thing than when I did it. Anyway, the highlights seem to be uneven so can you fix that (make them more even)? Thanks for the compliment.  •Wanty• That's fine too! 23:13, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope that fixed what everyone was asking...Thanks Cloudy, Bluestar, and Wanty. c: You're welcome, Wanty. You're an amazing artist. 14:01, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

I think there is some lineart missing on the tail, the area on the body where the tail overlaps the body, the underide of the legs, and by the far eye. Could just be me though. 14:40, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

I just checked the lineart and I saw nothing missing..but keep up the good work, Frosty! 14:59, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

The lighter chest and muzzle do not seem to be there, and make the shading blend into the pelt more, and you can do that by blurring it tons. I know shading darkness is artist's choice, but can you lighten the shading, which will help it blend?(Not too light, though)  Also, make the earpink fill the whole ear. 20:46, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

Could you make the shading curve a bit up a more on the end of his haunch/back? 23:07, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Rave. c: 12:32, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading overall.

Define the light on the forepaws. 17:48, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

It may just be my iPad again but the shading shows up completely black. May I also ask to shade a little of the chest? It's a bit flat. 02:12 Mon Oct 14

I think it's your iPad, because it doesn't look that dark to me. o.O

Re-uploaded. I understand the different views..My computer is at a high stand, so I kinda get the effect of you looking up at it and it's that weird blue-white thing. xD So I have to stretch myself up a bit before I examine my own image, or someone elses. But yeah, it doesn't appear that dark to me. And instead, if I did lighten it, then it wouldn't match the rogue. *shrugs* 12:33, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

Blurred lineart on the tail. wow, this is so much better than my attempt I did on my computer e.e 00:55 Tue Oct 15

Re-uploaded. Thank you. :3 13:42, October 15, 2013 (UTC)

It looks like there's no shading on the chest whatsoever. Should that be like that? I highly doubt that, given your light source. It's the same one I use on my StarClan blanks, I believe. Which those have light sources lol

Re-uploaded. I'm liking the new name, Snowman! c: lol those are where I took my inspiration for my shading, thank goodness it's a correct one! xD 13:09, October 17, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm the chest is shaded on the wrong side it caves in 05:45 Fri Oct 18

He needs the rumpled fur, I believe, since he wasn't mentioned without it in StarClan.

Re-uploaded. Hope this was what you were looking for.. 20:29, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

Can you make the rumples match more? 21:16, October 19, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not sure whether this was what Hawkeh meant but could you make the rumples look more like the fur? Right now they look like a bunch of lines.  •Wanty• That's fine too! 02:28, October 20, 2013 (UTC)

I believe that she means make then match the rogue's. 13:04, October 20, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, Sorrel. That's what I meant. Thank you for explaining. 15:04, October 20, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe make the rumples... go with the fur, as well? Like, flip the ones of the side round to go with the flow of the fur. 21:03, October 20, 2013 (UTC)

Out of curiosity, why would she have to match the rumples with the rogue's? I believe that should be artist's choice. 12:07, October 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's whatever..Anyway, I redid him to match the rogue more. I darkened him to match, made the texture to match, and even followed the rumple style, and made it flow with the fur. Sorry it's been a few days, I've been busy. Hope it looks good. c: 12:39, October 22, 2013 (UTC)

The texture is a little too defined. Decrease the opacity? 00:33, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

the face and tail texture need to go with the flow of the respective areas 02:22 Wed Oct 23

Define overall shading and extend the earpink, make sure you smudge it and not blur it. It should look a little fuzzy due to him being a longhaired cat. Also would you like the file for him? 07:31 Wed Oct 23

Yes, please! That would help out a bunch. My email is darkfrosty.frosty@gmail.com if you want to send it through there. c: 20:28, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for the file, Raven. c: And I'll get to fuzzying up that earpink as soon as I can. For now, I lowered the opacity on the texture. And Kel, the texture is already flowing with the fur, so there is nothing really to change. And if you wanted it to all flow straight down, then that would totally squash the idea of his fur being rumpled, and I might as well take them off. So yeah, that's my opinion of that matter. 16:58, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

I disagree, Darkfrost. It should flow more with the body, and they look more like lines with a slight curve to them. I believe there would be at least more variation with the curve, instead of it being straighter... she's not saying it should flow straight down. She's saying it needs to flow with the cat. It's not all going to be facing one direction.

Re-uploaded. 02:18, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

The texture looks a bit thick, so could you make it thinner? Sorry if you don't get what I mean.  •Wanty• That's fine too! 12:21, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

Can you darken the texture and make it flow more with the body, as it seems to be only straight lines. 14:04, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

The ear pink looks very blotchy, and the muzzle shading looks very dark compared to the rest of him. Match the raggedyness from the rogue more. 20:38, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I understood, Wanty. c: 13:02, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

What happened to the ear pink? I can't see it anymore?

Darken and seperate the texture quite a bit. 22:17 Mon Oct 28 22:17, October 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried a different texture color, which helped with alot of the problems mentioned. And sorry, Snowy. xD I accidentally shaded that ear too much on that version. 23:48, October 29, 2013 (UTC)

Try and make the ruffled fur a bit finer; right now it looks a little wooly 04:01, October 30, 2013 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Re-uploaded. I hope this made him look more ruffled then wooly..Sorry Snowy, I was having an extremely busy week! Do any of you think this looks close to the rogue? Because sometimes when I'm working on it I get extremely discouraged, since I feel as if I'm not matching up to Bloo's incredible work. 23:02, November 2, 2013 (UTC)

He's too light; both in base and in general coloring. Normally the shading would make it darker, but this time the shading's thin so it's not really dark... he looks almost light gray and he should be black.

Re-uploaded. I think this turned out amazing... 01:37, November 3, 2013 (UTC)

Add a bit of depth the shading. The ragged/rumpled fur looks a tad too spikey and out of place. Maybe try this? (use it, use it as a base, or don't use it- doesn't bother me. 14:26 Mon Nov 4

Did you forget to fill in the nose? Fill it with black. Looking good! 22:10, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Queen Blanks - For Approval
As requested, I kept the same posture and basic pose, but I did switch which legs were up and which were down, simply because it's about 10x easier and faster to do them at this angle, and I'm sure you guys are getting a bit impatient waiting for these to be approved by now. Comments?

Yay for Paleh! Maybe scrunch the forehead down a bit; it seems a bit high to me. 00:37, October 24, 2013 (UTC)

Define the toes on the hind leg off the ground. Maybe give the face a more feminine look? This is amazing! Those are pretty much the only things that need tweaking, in my personal opinion. 00:39, October 24, 2013 (UTC)

It's a cat? Cats don't specifically look feminine or not. This looks like a cat, so it's alright. o.O The only adjustments to the face that I can see is to do what Scar said. 00:40, October 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not defining the toes. They simply wouldn't be very defined at this angle, and if I define them it will look very silly I assure you. And as leggy said, she shouldn't look any more feminine than another cat. The eyelashes are there, and that's all we use to define them as females on here. No reason to do any different.

Should the whiskers be that long? If that's intentional, then you don't have to change it. These are neat and I can't wait to use them. *.* Can I just approve them now lol

Just a personal preference, so feel free to ignore; i know cats naturally have whiskers above their eyes but the queen is the only one that represents that, it might look a little odd with the rest, so maybe remove? Again, just a thought. 05:16, October 24, 2013 (UTC)

Yes the whiskers are meant to be that long. I actually shortened them in my last upload, so I don't know if the changes are showing for you, but the length they're at right now I'd like to keep. I'd be happy to change them if someone else agrees though. And same goes for the whiskers above the eyes, I'd rather keep them, but if someone else agrees I'll get rid of them.

Maybe make the face thinner? Lovely!

I think the whiskers look fine, tbh, and the face is full-on - it's not gonna look very thin. 16:58 Thu Oct 24 2013

Yeah, I'd prefer not to thin out the face, sorry.

The chin looks to be a little on the big side to me, but only a little bit. And just a personal preference, but I think with the way that the body is facing that it would look a little more natural to have the face pointing in the direction that she is going instead of directly at us, I mean it's not wrong, but it's just my thought is all. 01:01, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

I think the way the face is pointed is fine. 01:04, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded For the most part at least, the face is pointing in the general direction of where she's walking. I think it's fine honestly. But I did shrink the jaw by a few pixels.

Looks great Pale! However, the right corner of her mouth appears to be thicker than the left. If it's the case where it needs to be like that so the shrank jaw can look right, then sorry for nitpicky n_n"

I'm afraid I'm not quite sure what you mean. Try wording it differently?

I think she's talking about the /lineart/ on the right corner of her jaw/mouth area... compared to the left side, it appears to be a couple pixels thicker?

I think that's simply because there are multiple different lines meeting there. The cheek, the lip, the whisker, and the shoulder. I may not be look at the same place though. I'm not sure

Make the nose a more triangular shape? 14:57, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Imo, the whiskers look a bit too long. Maybe just erase like a inch off each one? Since the whiskers on the other blanks aren't that long. She looked amazing! 16:10, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

A cats' whiskers are typically long enough so that wen a cat tries to get through a space, if the whiskers fit without being bent or moved, then the hips, shoulders,and bellies of the cat can fit as well. I believe the whiskers are perfectly okay.

And also to keep in mind this cat is pregnant, so I agree with Leggy. color:steelblue 16:14, October 25, 2013 (UTC)

Does anyone else have any comments for these? I'd actually really like to get the longhaired ones posted as well, and with the new book coming out soon, this page will be overloaded soon enough.

Ah, sorry if this sounds offensive, but the chest caves in a little... Awkwardly. Don't get me wrong, these are great blanks though~ 19:32, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

No offense taking at all really. But with the way cat's anatomy works, the "chest" (ribcage) is much farther back, and the spot you're looking at is really just where the legs meet, and that's what I portrayed it as. It doesn't bump out where they meet normally, especially when the legs are int his position.

I think the chest is fine. I don't see anything else wrong with these, and I'm excited for the longhairs! :D Amazing work, Paleh! I love these! 20:17, October 26, 2013 (UTC)

There haven't been any comments for the past few days; longhairs now? 00:04, October 31, 2013 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get on the longhairs. Sorry, they should have been done already but I got really sick when I planned to make them. I'll get them up asap.

'Uploaded There we go.

Sedgestar (L) ~ For Approval
Comments? He's confirmed with a description in Tigerstar's nine lives ceremony, and I love how this turned out <33. 00:09, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Did you forget to fill in the nose? Excellent job, as always, Beebs! 2:24 Tue Nov 5

re-up I did, actually, but I decided to define it in this upload to make it easier to see ouo 02:31, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define the leg and shoulder shading. This be niiiice. *.*

re-up thanks 8DD 19:25, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Sorreltail (Star) ~ For Approval
whispers lets get this approved quick i'm gonna be without internet soon 03:43, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Awww... I liked Sorrel... Give more depth to the shading on the back, especially on the black patches 04:39, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I know, Scarlet, I know. ;-; 05:07, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the flecks a bit and this is awesome.

Re-uploaded. eep 06:06, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

That‘s a good picture. I think you do it very well.

but you should add more dark black -stealfog  21:00,5th,Nov.2013

Blur the flecks more and lower the opacity on them the slightest bit. 13:20, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the patches a bit and possibly define the eye depth? Very pretty! 17:03, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Either smudge or blur the shading on a low rate. Such a pretty dead cat. <span style="">17:25 Tue Nov 5

I think the opacity of the flecks are fine, since it'll appear a bit lighter when it's blurred ouo 21:22, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not blurring the flecks anymore now. 03:04, November 6, 2013 (UTC)

Blizzardwing (A) - For Approval
If the changes aren't showing, see here, comments? I'm quite fond of this <span style="">05:00 Tue Nov 5

Smudge the mottles tad? I love this c: <span style="">17:23 Tue Nov 5

I personally think they look okay, but I'll smudge them if someone else agrees. <span style="">19:22 Tue Nov 5

I think the mottles are fine as well. Maybe define the eye depth a bit? Nice job, he's gorgeous! 21:23, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

It looks kinda green... 05:00, November 6, 2013 (UTC)

Lightning Tail (Ki) ~ For Approval
Beebs thank you so much you are amazing. So here is my darling and I am not changing the eye color because of reasons. Nor will I lighten him, but I will fiddle with the shading and/or texture.

Lighten him a tad so I can see the shading and texture. x3 Wonderful Skye~ 13:19, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

I said I wasn't going to lighten him, Duck. This is because the base is light enough as it is, and if it's any lighter, it'll be gray. I did fiddle with other things, though, so re-uploaded.

There's some waste between the fur on this >>> side of the head. So sweet. <span style="">17:18 Tue Nov 5

Re-uploaded. Thank youu~

Define the shading justtt a little bit, and I think he'll be good. Wonderful, Skye. 21:21, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Mmm I've gotta say that you might lighten him just a touch. I still can't see the texture/shading very well. <span style="">3:10 Wed Nov 6 2013

Thorn (Ro) ~ For Approval
Eh. Comments?

Define the shading and add some depth to it if possible, it's lookin' a little flat at the moment. <span style="">07:48 Tue Nov 5

Add a little more texture? It's great, Silver c: <span style="">12:48 Tue Nov 5

Texture is completely optional. 13:19, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. Cute! <span style="">17:12 Tue Nov 5

Reuploaded (See hereif the changes aren't showing.) Thanks for your lovely and helpful comments ^3^

Darken, define, and add depth to the shading. 21:20, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Badgerfang (Star kit) ~ For Approval
My little Badgy c: Comments? 07:53, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

This should be named File:Bagderfang.star.png, as his warrior name was used in The Ultimate Guide.

Some of the eye color on the right side is leaking out. This is amazing! <span style="">17:11 Tue Nov 5

Reups thanks! c: 20:23, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading just a little bit? 21:23, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reups this is as defined as I can get it. 22:09, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

White looks a bit on the gray side on the chest and paws 04:59, November 6, 2013 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt W 2) ~ For Approval
Here's the Sandstorm. Silver, I OWE YOU SO MUCH!!! Thanks so much for reserving this for me. Anyway, I did do this to be a pointed tabby, thank goodness Raven taught me how! <span style="">18:26 Tue Nov 5

What exactly is this alt for?

She was described as russet in Firestar's section of TUG. <span style="">18:43 Tue Nov 5

Ah, that makes sense. I'll go and cite that then, since I have the book. As for the image, define the texutre, as it fades into the shading, and make it curve with the body more. Also define the overall shading, especially on the tail, legs, and haunch. Would you also mind making the ear pink a teeny bit more visible, color-wise?

Define her tabby stripes? 20:24, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Arc (Ro) ~ For Approval
This is, like, the best image I have ever made, and I'm proud. Comments? <span style="">22:06 Tue Nov 5

Alder (Kit) ~ For Evaluation
Isn't she the cutest little thing? I know I'm not actually part of the project, so if there's anything wrong with how I reserved her (I put my name in the table and followed its format) please notify me and I will withdraw her. Emberpoppy7 (talk) 23:11, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Brighten the white a bit? Very nice! <span style="">3:09 Wed Nov 6 2013

Smooth out the shading, it looks a bit blotchy 04:58, November 6, 2013 (UTC)

Leaf (Ro) ~ For Evaluation
Meh, I fail. Anyways, I put "For Evaluation" because this is my first charart! But as I've seen in other discussions, it can be removed when the user knows what he/she knows what they're doing. So, comments? -- 23:51, November 5, 2013 (UTC)

Can you darken the highlights a smidge? The seem shiny. Nice job! <span style="">1:56 Wed Nov 6

He needs to be black and white, if I'm not mistaken. 01:58, November 6, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and give him a gray nose 04:58, November 6, 2013 (UTC)

Misty (Ro) - For Approval
Alright, before anyone starts complaining, there is indeed white markings on her chest, face, and paws. They're just small. Trying a new technique of gray and white kittehs today, kids. c: Comments? 04:57, November 6, 2013 (UTC)