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Bluestar (Alt. Ki2)- For Approval


In the allegiances for Bluestar's Prophecy, she was described as a gray she-cat with blue eyes, and, in case you couldn't tell by my username, she's my favorite character, so I snatched her up as soon as I found out she would get one for that. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad. Brighten the ear-pink and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the left ear's earpink. 00:14 Fri Dec 2

Cute! Define the shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:53, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 02:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the --> (right) side of her. 23:54, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the shading on the paws. 19:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks as if it's not in the right place on ---> this side. 21:21 Sat Dec 3

And center this ---> ear pink. And blur <--- this sides earpink a bit. 22:50 Sat Dec 3

This looks the color of her pale alt, which is still kinda blue-gray, maybe color pick from her gray leader alt? It'd look more gray probably. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 21:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen and center the ear pink. Darken and blur the shading, it looks like you have none. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is gray and define the shading. 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the gray lineart, defined the shading, and got rid of some waste i found; changes not showing. Bluestar11796 17:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found some more waste, and changes are still not showing. Bluestar11796 17:53, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading on the <-- 21:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the right ear pink. 21:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is off, I belive. If not, lighten the shading on <--- that side and blur it so it looks a little bit better. 23:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

As said above and blur the shading too 23:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color different from the pelt color, as it looks the same. 05:34, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

As said already BLUR THE SHADING TOOOOONS! Also the shading placement is off it should be on the neck and on the legs too. 14:36, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looks blotchy, but I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 16:11, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are white streaks on her face and chest. Make those gray. 16:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a bit, and blur the highlights (if any) and shading to make them blend more together. 22:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC). The whole pelt color looks blotchy and uneven, smooth it out 23:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 00:07, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can. Smooth it out. 01:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's possible to blur it. If you're using pixlr, change to something else. I know pixlr only allows you to blur so much. 03:23, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

I do use pixlr at school, but I can't use gimp right now 'cause I'm at school right now, and I can't download anything on the school computers. Bluestar11796 17:52, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Gaussian blur on pixlr. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:51, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpinks. 21:49 Thu Dec 8

Are you still working on this? 20:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 01:08, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It hasn't been seven days yet. 01:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. And sorry for the delay; my computers at home are crashing, so I haven't been able to get on, but I remembered that my school has photoshop, so, yeah. Bluestar11796 17:43, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the shading placement, then blur a LOT. Do you use layers? Brightstripes 16:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I just started using layers, but it's kinda hard with photoshop, because you can't change the background, and that's all I can use right now. I'll try, though. Bluestar11796 18:56, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading darker and you're good to go. 00:18, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think the changes are showing. Bluestar11796 14:32, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's a ton of blurred lineart on both sides. 00:19, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading a ton, define the earpink, and make the eyes less neon.

Reuploaded I basicly redid the whole image, cause I don't know how to fix blurred lineart, and who did the comment above mine? You forgot to sign. And I'll leave the eye color the way it is because she has peircing, ice-blue eyes unless more people agree with you. Changes not showing. Bluestar11796 16:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. 21:27, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the color match her leader image, right now it looks to dark/gray. 22:21, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Perhaps make the ear pink pointed a bit more. -- 07:06, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. 18:29 Sat Dec 17

'Reuploaded Believe it or not, the colors were taken from her leader alternate. Bluestar11796 19:32, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and darken the shading. 20:01 Sat Dec 17

Seedkit (Ki) - For Approval
Oi...I must really like kits. :P Comments~? 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Redden the ear-pink and define it in her ginger ear. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:23, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks. 19:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Beautiful Twi! Blur the places where the patches are smudged, they're too sharp. 19:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, I see waste. I'll kill it~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Killed the evil waste~! >:) 19:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! *noms* Define the shading. :3 (probably more evil waste for you to kill) 19:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate the evil waste. :P 22:09, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink the slightest bit. Make the ear pink on ---> that side a little bit smaller to make the other one. 23:14, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine to me. 01:43, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

What to change and what not to change? 02:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to change the earpink, it's fine, however could you define the shading a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - But of course. :3 21:44, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawn to reserve another charart 00:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

If this is withdrawn may I do it? 00:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may. Go reserve it 00:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the confusion, I thought we were doing apprentice images. Is it okay if I still work on it, or no? 00:40, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so back to for approval. I will bw working on this so it might take a day or two because I am going to be doing it on GIMP. Thanx for your patience. 21:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. I just can't work with this...Gimp shows the lineart blurred and all and I couldn't work with this. I'm sorry. 15:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Since this is withdrawn (again), may I do it? Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  15:47, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to ask, just go for it ;3 18:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading was to light in my opinion, so I darkened it and I found more evil waste to kill! Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  19:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! SO pretty, Make the earpinks the same size. 19:48 Sun Dec 11

Reuploded Purplemoon   We wish you a Perry Christmas...  19:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'd lighten the whole image because it looks too dark. Also, blur the neck shading as it looks to hard edge. 20:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon  Three Advent candles lighted  20:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image a bit more. 06:58 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded Purplemoon  Three Advent candles lighted  12:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Crop the image to get rid of the extra space and lighten the white. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It was hard to lighten the white... Purplemoon Three Advent candles lighted  21:56, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

The white still needs to be whiter. 00:16, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Horrible. Comments? 02:00, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading, define the haunch highlight and the one on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and brighten it. 02:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I just noticed I uploaded on meh B-Day ^^ 02:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Either darken the head shading or lighten the "highlights". 02:27 Thu Dec 8

This doesn't look very tawny... Maybe take the color from Birchfall's alt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the color from the ear pink chart, I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else has an opinion. 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. Also, Take the colors from Oakheart's alt warrior, if you're looking for tawny. This doesn't look...tawny...if you ask me. If it is, it's pale and should be darkened. 03:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did Okay I darkened it because it is tawny I took it from the ear pink chart. I would have used gausion blur, but I don't really know how to use it :P 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better, actually. Now, define the ear pink. I don't care if it's from the chart or not. I can't see it. 03:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading quite a bit. Also, just cause the color (pelt OR earpink) is from the chart, doesn't always make it right. Sometimes the colors just need to be tweaked to fit certain images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading (sorry I don't mean to repeat things) and make the earpink darker. 16:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna be the death of me 18:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more. 13:10, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it worse. 02:27, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be darkened more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more umm pink and not peach. xD This looks great! 00:19, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @ Cinder I don't know waht you mean so I just darkened the ear pink. Changes not showing. 21:43, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading; it's a bit flat. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I meant that you should make the earpink pink-ish because right now it looks peach.. 21:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ear pink looks horrible. 00:47, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more and darken the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading also. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *hides* Don't kill me for making it worse! 14:42, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I like it.... not sure if it's my place to say that though Tigerheart273 14:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Course its your place to say that. I love this picture. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 16:41, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, yeah, you can say that it looks nice, but only after 24 hours of no comments, and if nobody has already commented to say the same. Otherwise, it just clutters up the talk page. The shading needs to be blurred and darkened a lot. <span style="">20:04 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded I used layers now. Tell me if it's too dark. Thank you for your positive comments, you guys :) 20:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yay layers! It looks so much better. Lighten the layer opacity a tad and erase the shading on the top of the muzzle and add some to the ears. Also make the earpink more visible, as I cannot see it at all right now. <span style="">20:53 Sat Dec 17

Yellowfang (A) - For Approval


Okay, so, she's in 'Chararts needing images' Under Thunderclan. For a Apprentice...wwhy, i don't know, i think it should've been in Shadowclan but okayyy. Anyway here she is! I didnt know if i shouldv'e torn her ears and give her scars or not, so i didn't and i took ALL chararts from her mc image. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The Warriors App said her apprentice name was Yellowpaw. =P Blur the shading. 03:01, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Could you make the fur spikes more consitant with the other images please? 03:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the snout needs to be shortened. 03:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the part not in shadow on her tail longer and run the length of her tail. Smudge the pelt color into the ear. Give her a light part on the dip in her back as the light would hit her there. 03:07, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and she needs a dark gray/black nose 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. <span style="">03:42 Fri Dec 9

Blur the highlights. (If you used them) -- 13:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ruffles in the fur a bit larger and sharper like her other chararts, also make the muzzle a bit shorter. - Scarletwind    ✧ L i s a n n a<span style="color: #592e81">✧          23:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the ear-pink more please. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

Okay, give me a few, i have to get my S.S. HW done, how do i make her ruffles sharper? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:46, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and smudge the earpink into the ear. Curve the line of the jaw more. <span style="">22:44 Sat Dec 10

Blend the highlight/shading on the tail into the pelt. 18:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:49, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you feel comfortable with it, I think the image would benefit from teh eyes being rounded slightly. 03:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

How would I do that? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:29, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 15:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading/highlights are blotchy. Can you blur them? Also tone down the highlights (or darken the base coat if you're not using them) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  16:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened her base coat(Didn;t want to use Highlights on tis one....) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:26, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's a white pixel in the ruffled fur on her shoulder. 22:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I have like NO idea how that got there....O.o Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to contradict myself, but lighten the whole thing to match the MC image. Also, the shading doesn't make sense, look at the apprentice tutorial for how it's supposed to look. Blur it a ton and blur the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * laughs* *roll eyes* Make up your mind, why don't you? Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 01:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-That had better been worth the headache. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Headache.....So, oh teh chat, Paleclaw told me to lighten her a touch, and to blur her shading. So i did....Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. 20:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be all one colour. 20:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the pelt into the earpink. 20:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I GOT VOLECLAW :D I copied all of the shading and colors from his warrior so dont be slapping me 4 that :P 13:45, December 8, 2011 (UTC) (im going to eventually set up my sig on here :P )

Blur the shading a lot and try to make it look like it's coming from one light source. Nice job, though. ^^ 14:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge where the earpink meets the gray, and the two paws farthest from us should be darker to match with the shading. 14:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLAODED, changes aren't showing :| 14:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement more like the one in the tutorial. The shading doesn't make sense right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye and smudge the pelt color into the earpink so he looks floofeh =3 18:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

And add a white pixel to the eye if it's not already there. *can't see it* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

He seems darker than his other images, or is it just my bad eyes? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 00:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading on the tail or darken the shading on the belly and legs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. I can see the layers in which they get stronger. 20:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Bluefeathers friend here, she said she'd reupload it tomorrow. 14:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think I will re-do this tomorrow as I cannot stand how this is. And I can't really fix the shading placement because for some reason, on Pixlr, every time I use gaussian blur on it, it changes the placement :\ 00:39, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you need any help, if the shading isn't going right, I could help you. <span style="">01:47 Tue Dec 13

REUPLOADED Mrrrrrrrrrooooooowwwwwwwww :P 12:23, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

THIS IS BOOTIFUL BLUEFEATHER! No comments from me :) Grayflower10 16:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Don't leave a comment just for complimenting the image unless there haven't been any comments for a couple days, please, Grayflower. Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the ears a bunch. The shading still doesn't make a lot of sense. You also need to fix your signature, Bluefeather. <span style="">19:53 Tue Dec 13

Ok, first of all, i've been having SO MUCH TROUBLE WITH SMUDGING. This entire time it's been for approval i've been trying to smudge it in but it just won't. I did the shading exactly like the apprentice tutorial....and I honestly don't think that the shading needs blurred. Not trying to say that I won't blur it but I just don't see why it needs blurred. And Sweetflower is making me a sig so it'll be fixed soon :) 20:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay well I can't see any lack of shading on the shoulder ("highlights", if you will) and it doesn't make much sense. It'll look a lot better if you add some "highlight" (just erase the shading) on the shoulder and then blur it manually if you use Gaussian blur. <span style="">01:29 Wed Dec 14

Are you still working on this, Bluefeather? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, yes I am. I just used dodge on it if that's alright.. 18:42, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it a ton, if you look at this charart and the warrior image close to each other, the warrior is much lighter. Hmmm..lighten the shading? 20:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink into the pelt to make it look natural. 21:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
I am very proud of this <3. :3. Comments? Elorisa  01:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

You should be. :) There is waste around the charart, and blur the tail shading. 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Would this get a charart? All we know is that he's a "dark tom", and we can't just copy the grayscale from a comic... 04:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteclaw got one and he was also mentioned as a dark tom. I think he should. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Just...dust and echoes 07:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He does appear to be almost black in the image he is shown in; I'll tweak him a tad, but I think he should get one :3. Elorisa  13:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I concede that. Go nuts. 14:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

I can see waste between the whiskers and possibly under the chin area. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 07:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. 19:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ -- Elorisa   21:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">22:40 Sat Dec 10

Blur the highlight(?) on the back leg. <span style="">11:55 Tue Dec 13

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, it just loks blurred. <span style="">00:02 Thu Dec 15

Are you still working on this, Risa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you are, the tiny glimmer in the --> eye is too...wide. Long. I don't know, too --->this way. 20:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it, gimp is down and I lost my layers >.> I'll upload it in the next few days. -- Elorisa   23:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading into the pelt a bit more. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:07, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar(A) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Not my best. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think he should be short haired. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make him match the leader image. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur his markings more and define the shading. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 02:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I made him short-haired and I'll do everything else in the morning. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. RE-UPLOADED. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match the leader better. <span style="">00:55 Sat Dec 10

And blur where the belly meets the ginger. 02:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna withdraw this. I'm not quite ready for Firestar yet. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I'll reuploaded this ASAP. 17:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Sandstorm. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  17:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay I re-did the stripes the best I could and I also tweaked a few other things. 17:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the stripes, belly, and earpink, and make the stripes match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded okay I color picked off of his leader image and I did my very best with the stripes. 18:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the belly to the pelt. 18:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded I smudged it a touch too. Changes not showing. 18:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

You probably took the colors from the shaded part of the image, cause the stripes are still too dark. Lighten them. And they don't really match the leader image still.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the non-shaded part of the image. Okay, I looked at the Firestar leader image and I mached it to the best of my ability okay? It matches it the way I see it. 18:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the stripes sharper at the ends. 19:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pale belly come to a point instead of being round at the top  19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry, but it doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">23:06 Sat Dec 10

Add shading and highlights. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, she just has to add shading. She can add highlights if she wants to, but it's not necessary. 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sorry.

Reuploaded Okay Ivystripe gave me a redline. Better? 18:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, Firestar ;3 And yes, Better Sandstorm. Define the shading even more and blur together the markings. 18:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Give all of the credit to Ivystripe. 19:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading more and the stripes still need to be lightened a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stripes fail :P 01:29, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to make it look like the other images and blur the shading so that it blends more into the unshaded parts. 01:34, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Those are the right amount of stripes. I should know since I did all but his leader image (if I had done the leader I would have done the stripes differently) 01:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you for referencing Ivystripe 02:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Alright. Blur the lighter part of his fur a bit more. 02:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 23:37, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Umm nobody's commented in three days... bad? 21:45, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Defione the stripes, blur and darken the shading, and smudge the ear pink into the pelt. 00:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

All right, this definitely isn't enough stripes... Also, the stripe closest to his back leg shouldn't be curved. 00:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay ivystripe gave me that redline so.. Take it up with her >_>;; I'll reupload this tomorrow anyway. 03:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Eww >_> 00:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink to make it look more realistic. <span style="">18:32 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded Is that better? 20:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ For Approval
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. <span style="">07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 00:22, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

And smooth the shading too. It is blotchy in some places. <span style="">05:47, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Make the color match the MC image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and tone down the highlights if you use them. Breeze whisker  21:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Starforce? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

If Starforce isn't, may I work on this? 01:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, not yet. It hasn't been a week. They get a full seven days. 02:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (A) ~ For Approval
I quite like Willowpelt :) 15:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but thicken the shading until it matches the warrior image. 15:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 15:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing 15:36, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge the ear pink. 23:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, sigh...darn blur tool :\ every time I don't use layers my chararts stink, but every time I do use layers with this blank it changes the placement! Raaaawrrrrr 00:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I decided to completely redo it, please don't tell me to lighten it because Pixlr's being annoying :\ I'll try if you ask but no promises I can completely fix it... 12:35, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her a lot and try and make the shading like on of the ones in the Apprentice Tutorial. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink please. <span style="">01:33 Wed Dec 14

Are you still working on this, Bluefeather? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this, I have better chararts already made that i'd like to do instead of this soooo yeah. 18:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone who wants it can take over. Ill archive it in 24 hours. 20:20, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I need something to do. XD 20:23, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took all colors from her warrior image. Comments? 20:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the light source (i know you don't use highlights Cloudy) on the shoulder and haunch. Other that that this is bootiful. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:03, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Rain. ^.^ 03:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Dovewing (A) ~ For Approval
Not sure i like this... 15:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make her lighter. Take the colors right from her warrior image. 15:26, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I did take the colors straight from her but gaussian blur broke her :( So I simply had to dodge it. REUPLOADED, changes aren't showing, I think :P 15:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink please. Also correct me if I'm worng but the shading looks like it's in the wrong places, kind of like just a big streak going across her body. Look at the shading placement in the apprentice tutorials if you need help. <span style="">22:43, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Yes it is wrong. There needs to be shading onher back hanch and across her spine should be shading not highlights. Just making things specific :3 <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest taking a look here for where the shading goes. <span style="">23:35 Fri Dec 9

The eyes don't look pale golden to me...did you take that from her warrior? Make sure you add depth to her eyes as well  20:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes as well. 20:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't the eye style artists choice? 02:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Eye style is but shading an eye isn't style. Without shading it just looks flat and that's not realistic. 04:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Message from Loudy(I'm Loudy's real life friend): I'll reupload it as soon as possible.

Ah, okay. Sorry for the mishap. (and sorry that I am posting nonsense comments right now xD)  20:20, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">12:07 Tue Dec 13

Um....Blue here, Loudy needed me to get on her computer and upload this because she has a softball tournament today. 12:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Either the base pelt or shading needs to be lightened, me thinks. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 03:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:24, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, 5 words: I. Hate. The. Blur. Tool. 17:10, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the charart; Dovewing is a pale gray cat - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">00:21 Fri Dec 16

The shading doesn't really make sense right now. Try looking at the apprentice tutorial for a redline of how it's supposed to go. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:53, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a tad. 20:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (A) - For Approval
Ta-da! I'm extremely proud of this. Comments? 21:10, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink to give it a more realistic look. This is really good, Blossom! 21:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Can you make the black spot on the haunch just a tad bit bigger to match the warrior image? 21:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! Could you make the earpink a little less purple? If you got it from the warrior image, then nevermind. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. (Lovely Blossom!) <span style="">00:43 Sat Dec 10

Her nose should be dark grey. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 09:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, everyone. :3 -- 13:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading even more please  00:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Blossomtear? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt A.) ~ For Approval
Brackenfur was described as a ginger tom in Fire and Ice when he was an apprentice. Took the ear color for his warrior image. Comments? 21:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Realized I used the female lineart xD Removed the eyelash thing, but the changes aren't showing. 21:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little (as in color-wise) and blur the edges of them some more 21:40, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:54, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The back leg looks highlighted instead of shaded. I don't know if it was intentially but I'm just pointing it out. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for what the shading should look like, and saturate the image a bunch. <span style="">01:05 Sat Dec 10

I used the shading placement guide wildheart. The gaussian blur just made it look weird. 02:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the shading a tad and saturated the image. 12:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad more. 20:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes a tad. 02:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:17, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make him a bit redder? A bit more like Firestar. He looks golder-brown right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a tad more. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:09, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bunch. <span style="">20:13 Sat Dec 17

Bluestar (A) ~ For Approval
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? <span style="">23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. <span style="">00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. <span style="">00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) <span style="">23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. <span style="">21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD <span style="">00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Doesn't everyone? ;) <span style="">23:22 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading and the highlights. 01:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and no offence, but the shading is blurred enough and to the max. <span style="">11:08 Thu Dec 15

Darken the shading, on the rump especially. And have you tried Gaussian blurring it? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always use gaussian blur for shading. <span style="">00:56 Sat Dec 17

Whitestorm (A) - For Approval
I think I can do this. Alright, I'm really proud of this charart. Please do tell me if something is wrong with it. I adore Whitestorm, so I like that I can do his apprentice charart. <span style="">22:33, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

There seems to be some white pixels in his ears. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC) Also make his ears feathered like his deputy image. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:42, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if the ear's should be like the deputy charart because he is older then and has been in more battles, and it's not like that in the warrior image. The white pixels on the ear is the smudged pelt color into the earpink, unless you want me to change that. <span style="">22:53, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

That would probably work if the earpink had white all around it and you're right if the warrior charart doen't have it then the apprentice charart doesn't need it. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I see what you mean now by the white pixels. <span style="">22:59, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Darn, I was hoping to get this after Badgerpaw was done. XD Anyways we he actually got the scar as an apprentice, but since we don't know at what point, and you can't see the back of the ear anyways, I'd say forget about it. Can you darken the shading. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have tufted ears, too? Bluestar11796 23:20, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't mention what was already said, Bluestar. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  23:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Mmmm xD. Okay, but you can't really see the scar on the warrior image anyway. <span style="">00:03, Sat, Dec, 10, 2011

Define the shading. <span style="">00:11 Sat Dec 10

Don't berate Bluestar for stating what needed to be done, Firestar. It hadn't been mentioned before. She's right: this does need tufted ears. Blur and darken the shading a bit. Lovely job, apprentice ;) <span style="">01:11 Sat Dec 10

I already said it needed feathered ears. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

But then DJ said something about it not needing them, and it wasn't fixed on the next upload. Bluestar has every right to say that. Don't get bossy, apprentice. She was only making a point, and a good one at that. The warrior charart probably wasn't tweaked yet, and that's why it doesn't have the ears. 06:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, just so lightly! <span style="">13:32 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded -  Fail on the tufts. <span style="">06:59, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Make the tufts taller and not contain earpink. Right now his ears look torn in three pieces. Just add it on top of the lineart  18:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you're having trouble, just copy Iceheart's lineart on Redtail. <span style="">06:23 Mon Dec 12

Darken the tail shading. <span style="">00:07 Thu Dec 15

Reuploaded -  <3 this charart. <span style="">05:39, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

It seems like the earpink's two different colors. Fix that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Better like this? <span style="">05:45, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Define the shading just a tad. PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MCA) ~ CBA
First tortie, comments? 01:14, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">01:29 Sun Dec 11

Also, smudge it into the earpink. 01:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add dapples. Pretty. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the nose. xD 02:01, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fail with the dapples. -- 02:08, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the belly's shading a tad. 12:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image, there are dapples. Fail. Dx 17:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink a wee bit. *steals* <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 22:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the tail stripes. Good job. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. -- 18:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks goooood to me ;) Setting 12 hours. <span style="">20:39 Sat Dec 17

Cinderpelt (MCA) ~ For Approval
I took all of the colors (except the nose X3) from her mc. I kinda like it. Comments? 16:45, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The broken paw should curl a little bit more, like in her other images. And make the nose dark grey. 16:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define ear-pink on →→ this ear ,16:57,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the nose, ear, and foot :). 17:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Poor Cinderpelt. Blur the shading to make it blend in more with either the highlights or the unshaded parts. Nice job with the lineart! 18:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you. I think this is a blurred as I can get it. :) 19:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her ankle joint looks swollen. make that part a little smaller.I know it's supposed to be twisted but it just looks kind of awkward right now 20:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the ankle thinner and changed a little of the lineart on the leg. 21:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the toes less long and make the paw a bit smaller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:43, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Wow this is taking longer than Lionheart. Fixed the paw. O.o 14:53, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink on her right side. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 03:40, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Made earpink lighter. 04:16, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The broken leg still looks a little swollen. Thin it out a little bit more. 20:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Ehh I think I made the leg too twiggy. 02:28, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should shorten the leg a little. As it is, it's longer than the normal apprentice image. Breeze whisker  16:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  18:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (A) - For Approval
Hmm, I must practice shadings more ,16:51,December 11,2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. Just make the nose pink, since white cats have pink noses. 16:57, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I like the shading, too. Cute! And, the deputy version has green eyes. :3 16:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its not green, but blue (Im going to tweak it and pre-made him). And I dont like white cats with blue eyes... Reuploaded ,17:00,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. =3 My bad. My eyes are obviously not very good. Blur the earpink. 17:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its ok, that eye is really small xD Reuploaded ,17:07,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Make the nose more pink. 19:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,20:30,December 11,2011 (UTC)

His eye colour should match the original image. Change it to blue. 02:15, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

NO ONE understands me there ,20:59,December 14,2011 (UTC)

I get what you mean Leaf, but just cause you're gonna tweak the deputy image, doesn't mean you should change the color of all of the eyes. There was nothing wrong with it before. But since you fixed them, CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:46, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt but I think the shading should be blurred/lightened more. <span style="">05:49, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

lightened? are you joking? I barely see tem on my PC ,21:06,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Perhaps blur then. <span style="">22:30, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Reuploaded ,12:24,December 17,2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) - For Approval
I'm EXTREMELY proud of this one. Comments? 17:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! Can you define a pale underbelly a tad please?*like it!* ,17:19,December 11,2011 (UTC)

And add the pale belly to his belly, like between the haunch and foreleg. :3 17:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a smidge. <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste all around it. 00:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I too see the waste. Dull the ear pink a touch and the herbs look like it's all...different colors. I know I'm being blunt, but it just looks unatural and odd. 02:13, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, its the same color as the one on the medicine cat image. And the herbs can be any color, I think. (has the same herbs on his medicine cat image, too) 02:33, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

You matched his MC wonderfully, Snow. Define the shading just a tad though. 15:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink into the ear some more? ^^ . 22:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:14, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source on his shoulder and don't have the back of his hindpaw that is furthest from us have a light part on the back of it. 00:54, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. <span style="">23:14 Thu Dec 15

Are you still working on this? 18:18, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
Yay! My first charart I like it! =) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 17:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and stripes. 17:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, rename this Owlwhisker.apprentice.png and smudge the earpink. 17:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency ,17:32,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading for you. Add more shading too, and make the stripes a tad bigger to match the other image. 17:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Ivy, i wanted to do it xD Yes Acorn, also add more stripes and made them more real, i never seen before a cat with such less stripes. Warrior version is going do be tweaked, i think :-) ,17:37,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you Ivy. Geez I've drawn a blank how do you add transparency? Changes aren't showing. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 17:59, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you're using GIMP, select the white areas, then go to edit---> clear. If it doesn't become transparent then go to Layers--->Transparency--->add alpha channel 18:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken stripes and add more lighter of them and made M stripe on the head. ,18:12,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Can someone blur the shading for me? GIMP isn't working at the moment. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstorm can you make the transparency for me? Its not working for me. =/ Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 21:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added light highlights, does it look okay? Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 23:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

i make it transparent when you get CBA it, darken the shadings more ,16:12,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Unfortunately, we can't CBA if it's not transparent. But don't worry, I've done it for you :) Blur the shading/highlights. 00:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys I've been really busy I got my own computer today so I'll get right on it. :) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 02:09, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay now how does it look? =) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan!  22:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading more? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  03:21, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Yeah, it's not that great, I know. Let me know right away if there's something up with it. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 17:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I removed the thumbnail for you. Redden the earpink, and define the shading. 17:32, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

She needs to have a gray/black nose. Maybe take the earpink from her kittypet charart. 17:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, smudge the earpink. 17:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-name this Birdpaw.apprentice.png. 17:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency ,17:36,December 11,2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The stupid blur tool is being a butt.could someone help me? And I don't know how to add transperency. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I made it transparent ,18:08,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Ty. I just noticed, does she need a scar? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 18:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm guessing that she should have two apprentice images, one with it and one without. 19:14, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Would that mean that she needs an alt for that, like Brightheart with her injuries? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No she just gets one with a scar. Add the scar. 19:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added the scar. Looks good? Also, the blur tool hates me D;. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

My eyes are betraying me today (Leafstorm XD) but is there shading on this image? 20:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">20:35 Sun Dec 11

Make the scar a little.. thinner. It looks fat right now. Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Three Advent candles lighted  20:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency again. 21:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the scar. Yes there's shading. No, it's not blurred. My blur tool won'te blur it. And Idk how to do transperency, first i've heard of it. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 01:09, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Transparency is where you get rid of the white background. And define the shading. (or darken it)  01:41, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as though there's alot of extra space. Crop it. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 20:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Birdpaw.apprentice.png. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink. <span style="">02:37 Tue Dec 13

Lighten the base colour, then darken the shading. I can barely even see the lineart. 00:28, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Rubblepaw (A) ~ For Approval
So here he is. Rubblepaw. I rather like this one....so comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The eye closest to us looks kind of reddish. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you. Blur the highlights so it blends in with the shading. 22:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fire, i made his eyes amber, they are the same color; however, i'll try to fi it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops haha NOW I fixed the title XD sorry! 22:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * Edit Conflict xD* Reuploaded-Better? Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

That's not amber, it's orange. Make it more yellowy. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:57, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I figured his eyes were described as amber, but he doesn't have an eye color, so you can keep it orange. :P Blur the shading/highlights though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:58, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the eyes nevertheless xD. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, will do. xD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:39, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink more, there's this random ear-pink edge on > this end. Can you erase the ear-pink there and make it part of the pelt? <span style="">00:33 Tue Dec 13

That's how its supposed to be..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

No, Sweet's right. It's too far into the pelt. <span style="">01:16 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights (?) are blotchy. Smooth them out. <span style="">11:50 Thu Dec 15

How were they blotchy? I was sure I blurred it into oblivion! I don't get that. but, anyways, Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:32, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gray meets the ear pink. 22:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

They are. It looks like a splotch, with the colours around it going darker. Blur them more please. <span style="">22:27 Thu Dec 15

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the ear pink and the "highlights" look blotchy. The shading placement looks sort of odd, and blur it. 22:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, can you smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, it looks like it was blurred and not smudged. <span style="">23:05 Thu Dec 15

On the behalf of Sandstorm, I'll explain how to fix the highlights, since she did not. Blur and smooth them together into the pelt. 18:27, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Runningbrook (A) - For Approval
Well, I tried ,16:46,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Darken the shading a tad. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the shading on the back of the back xD <span style="">23:37 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded,18:51,December 13,2011 (UTC)

The paws are darken than everything else, wither make the shading darker everywhere but the paws, or make the paws lighter please. <span style="">02:11 Wed Dec 14

Blur the shading a touch. <span style="">05:59, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Reuploaded,21:01,December 16,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and define the stripes. <span style="">20:46 Sat Dec 17

Sneezepaw (A) ~ For approval
Got all colors from original image. CommentS? 23:15, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">23:20 Mon Dec 12

Re-Uploaded. 23:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and darken it. <span style="">01:09 Wed Dec 14

Re-Uploaded. 01:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlights. <span style="">23:58 Wed Dec 14

I can't; then it won't show. It looks fine as it is. 22:51, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the tail shading and blur the haunch shading? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:47, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind leg. 20:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">07:30, Tue, Dec, 13, 2011

I love this! Make the stripes wavy like his warrior image. <span style="">11:48 Tue Dec 13

It's a bit darker than his other images. Could you lighten it up a bit? 14:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. <span style="">08:01, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

Make the stripes a bit thinner on the head and body but not the tail or ankles. Those look perfect. Also give his highlights a tiny bit of a golden-yellow tint like his warrior. Great job! 15:32, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes don't go solidly over curves like shoulders like that. It should break where his elbow starts, not go right over the lineart like it's not there. 02:25, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Fail. <span style="">06:27, Thu, Dec, 15, 2011

Blur the stripes a little. 01:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make the stripes a bit wavier. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I don't know how much wavier the stripes can get without destroying the whole image. <span style="">09:16, Fri, Dec, 16, 2011

Shadepelt (A) - For Approval
Please don't say about the color, I had a hard time :( Grayflower10 16:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are you a member of the PCA? I don't see your name on the apprentice list.... And if I understand right, you can't post chararts unless you're a member. You can go join though. Anyways, lighten the whole image and get rid of the white specks on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

The front page of PCA says that non-members can donate art. And Gray actually reserved it, so it's fine I think. ^^ She's the first non-member I've seen do the thing right. 16:40, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I did ask to join :) Grayflower10 17:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fill those two white pixels on her forehead? 18:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the pelt into the earpink. 18:05, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement like the one on the tutorial. Som eof the placements are wrong. <span style="">02:09 Wed Dec 14

Shading placement is the artist's choice, Sweetflower. As long as it makes sense, we can't tell anyone to make it match the tutorial. 02:59, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please make the earpink look pink. 19:49, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be pink, as the color is picked off the other images and dark gray/black cats often have gray inner ears. 01:35, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There are a couple of pixels by the ear. -- 07:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? <span style="">20:48 Sat Dec 17

Frecklewish (A) - For Approval
If Icy wants this, she can have it since she originally did it. Took all the colors from her kittypet charart. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 18:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

-Dies of the awesomeness of this charart- Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">00:12 Wed Dec 14

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:12, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Put mottles in her fur. I can see them on the kittypet pixil though I think they need to be tweaked. 05:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't the right colour, either. It's too grey. Also, Ivy: her kittypet image is fine; I think it's beautiful. 01:34, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the delay. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 17:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Swapped around the colors, thanks to Oblivion! ;) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could maybe add/bright the highlights so it matches the KP image better? This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

There should also be lighter mottles as well. No problem :D 01:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:40, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Woah now I can see why you're deputy. Anywho darken the shading and the ear pink a tad. Lovely! - 03:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make her a tad more brown and the stripes should be more pointy. 18:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyleaf(A) - CBA
It's my first Charart. Yay! Isn't she cute? I might of messed up with the eyes. comments? 22:23, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's taking a while to find the new image I did. No the weird extremely stretched old apprentice pizel, or a red link, or nothing. I guess it's coming soon. -_- 22:24, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yay it worked! 22:35, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more and blur it :3 <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:38, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes look a bit too yellow, make them greener like her warrior image. 22:41, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose black, and it seems like there's some missing lineart there, so fix that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:01, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more. <span style="">00:12 Thu Dec 15

Reuploaded. Missing lineart? You mean the nose thing? Hmm, I'll try, one sec. 00:44, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:50, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nosepink gray. 17:12, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed nosepink. 22:44, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Loudsplash, the nose pink should be black for a black cat, so fix it again, sorry. -- 00:49, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And make the earpink fill the whole ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I'll fix the nosepink, but...the earpink is in the whole ear. What do you mean by that? 02:06, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, fixed the eyes a bit. Can't wait till this is CBA! I mean, *clears throat* if it is. :3 17:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear and darken the shading in the eyes. <span style="">22:44 Fri Dec 16

Earpink into the ear? You mean Earpink into the pelt? What do you mean by that? And also, Re-uploaded, made the eyes have more contrast and smudged the earpink into the pelt, it that's what you were talking about. 00:06, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">00:45 Sat Dec 17

Re-uploaded 00:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, fixed earpink 04:58, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:58 Sat Dec 17

Dappletail (A)- For Approval
Comments? <span style="">23:47 Wed Dec 14

She also has a white back right paw. Add it? 23:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Lighten the white chest just a little. 00:52, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

That's shading, and it's fine Wildheart, this image is perfect! (Once you add the black paw if she has one ;) <span style="">12:16 Thu Dec 15

No, I think it needs to be lighten just a tad to match the other images. (it almost look just plain white in the warrior image >.<)  20:38, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! I took ALL colors from Dappletail's elder image(The white) so if it's to plae, don't blame me! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:28, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Calm down Maple, there's no need to get angry. 22:01, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Not getting mad, just defiending my charat :3 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:48, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Me sorry. Didn't mean for my comment to upset you. 3:  22:51, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wait I'm confused, what do you mean your charart Maple? 0.o This is Wildy's image.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:09, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, i did her warrior image! Mistypebble was complaing about Dappletail's warrior image's white being to pale, to which, i said i took all colors from her elder image. I felt like my image was being insluted, so I defined Dappletail's warrior iamge. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ohhh Ok. And I don't think Misty was saying it was too pale on here warrior image.... she was saying this should match that I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:22, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lol I leave for two days, and then I come back to a complicated debate XD I'm not lightening the white as it's so dark because of shading, and I can't lighten the shading without making it inconsistent. I think there should be darker shading on the warrior image to make it match. <span style="">21:59 Fri Dec 16

Softwing (A) - For Approval
Took all the Colors from her warrior charart. Changes may not be showing yet. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 15:56, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make her a girl. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  17:06, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Haha... Wrong blank. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 17:18, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if I'm just being a n00b, but when I withdrew her I asked if I could post her at a later date, when I had time to work on her, and I was told sure. I kinda thought I'd have until my two weeks to have a charart reserved were up. ^^; If not, maybe lighten the tops of the paws a bit? Breeze whisker  21:57, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Breezewhisker. Sorry, but withdrawn is withdrawn. When a charart is withdrawn, the timelimit expires and is up for grabs once again. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, but people did tell me I could do that. It's fine, I can find something else. But I'm still irritated I can't be told correctly. Breeze whisker  00:17, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

We did that with the maker of Plumwillow's image, I don't understand why Breeze couldn't do the same 00:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Since when? But I did ask Iceheart about this and she says that once a charart is withdrawn it's fair game again. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was snappy. But it's fine. I can pick someone else, and she's already working on it. It's not like there isn't a surplus of projects. It's just a small mixup. Breeze whisker  00:54, December 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * It's fine Breeze. Thanks for being so awesome :) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:42, December 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hmmm...pretty! Blur the stripes a tad. :) 23:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt. A)~ CBA
Comments? 16:11, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you tweak the stripes to conform to his body's shape? It looks really flat like this. 16:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Twist the jaw - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 17:21, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 00:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and make them curve more on the shoulder and head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Im not tweaking the stripes again. Im quite happy with them. 19:36, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Several hours without a comment, CBA? 16:40, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ferretclaw (A) ~ CBA
I'm putting this here on behalf of FerretclawLover, who just joined the wiki and PCA today but can't edit this page yet. I think it's great for a first charart. ^^ Comments? 16:46, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely for a first charart. :) Add shading to the back leg farthest from us, lighten the cream a bit, and smudge/blur the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  17:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:39, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful charart. :) Define the shading, but lighten it on the heel of his back foot (one closest to us) and blur the shading on his belly and front leg. (one closest to us) Also, his back leg (farthest away x3) doesn't look like the same color of the other spots. 20:35, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also, erase the cream on the front foot and on his belly that leaked over. (I feel like I'm talking to myself...) 20:52, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

x3 But we know your not. Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. (This is ver lovely!) <span style="">21:15 Thu Dec 15

Define the tail shading. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 21:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks excellent. CBA? 19:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Frecklewish (MCA) - For Approval
I actually really like her :3 02:19, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I do too! :3 Bring down the highlights a little. And, normally, the lighter part in the eyes starts in the bottom part, not the top...but I'm no expert. I actually like the eyes that way. 02:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

The eye is the artists choice. :3 02:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And the highlights are fine. Redden the earpink a bit though? This is gorgeous! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is fantastic! Maybe define the tail shading a bit? Love it! 09:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And actually, since the highlight is at the top of the eye, it would go lighter to darker, not the other way around. 12:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Actually Oblivion, realistically, the eye WOULD go lighter at the bottom and darker at the top. If you look at an image of a cat's eye, you see that it does do that. The bump above the eye, where the eyebrow is on humans, causes a shadow. But it does look fine like this, no need to change it, just wanted to clarify. Anyways, darken the spots/dapples a bit. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:45, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oh, I didn't know that. You learn something new every day ^^ 18:55, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the image just a tad. Lovely job! <span style="">20:50 Sat Dec 17

Hawkfrost (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 12:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! He should have more stripes. 12:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Icestorm has dibs on this image, did you get permission to do this image? 16:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even if you were allowed to, hmm. The eye needs more contrast in shades, and needs to be a tiny tad less neon Define the shading just a bit. 17:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm isn't active right now, so I don't know if she would be able to lay claim to any of her images. Try and thin out the middle of the stripes on the tail by a pixel or two. Also, the eyes look like they're blue with a tint of green. Did you color pick right from the warrior/deputy? 19:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even know Icestorm had dibs on the image... I actually just chose the color, since his eyes are an ice blue shade. 20:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon and add depth to them. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (A) - For Approval
Posting this for Brightstripes because she can't edit the page yet. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 13:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading a tad. 18:11, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink to give it a bit more of a realistic look. 18:50, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" on the haunch and shoulder a bit bigger. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it;s making her look black almost. <span style="">17:26 Sat Dec 17

Creekfeather (A) ~ For Approval
Ugh...sloppy. I dun like this one. Please please please tell me it needs improvements! I'm fine if you decline this one; it's horrible. 14:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a lot. 15:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

We don't decline chararts based on how they look or our personal opinions on them. You're just being hard on yourself. Make the nose a tad bit darker and blur the haunch shading some 18:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, as they say, our worst critic is ourselves. Blur the stripes just a tad. 18:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and blur the edges of the stripes a lot, actually. Notice how they're not as visible on the Warrior image as they are on here? If you need help, don't be afraid to ask. 19:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. And redden it a bit too. 19:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hmm...still sloppy, but I like it better! =D 23:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes, especially on main part of the body. I used the "Circle 03" brush on GIMP to make the stripes, if that helps you. 03:04, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Had to redo the entire thing to get the stripes thinner, and I appreciate the help, only I use Pixlr. 07:31, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I use pixlr too, so I understand your pain. However, I feel like the stripes on the tail are a bit unnatural, and that they could be blurred a bit more. I find it easier just to continue blurring until it looks good. Really good though! 08:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Um. I had dibs on this image. I'm not going to take it from you (I'm being nice) but be more careful next time you reserve an image. <span style="">20:59 Sat Dec 17

Jayfeather (MCA) - For Approval
He's my favourite character of all time! I copied the stripes from the apprentice image very precisely, and that was hard. Comments? 18:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

You did wonderful, Moonleaf. Define the shading a little. 18:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 18:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, I wanted to do this one. :P Make the herbs less blue. Take them form the MC image maybe? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and lighten the stripes to match the MC. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The herbs didn't look blue to me, but I darkened them anyways. 03:06, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a teensy bit? Once you do I'll CBA this because you did such an amazing job! 17:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Go ahead. 19:16, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (A) ~ For Approval
I think it's actually okay. Comments? 18:06, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oi! This is sooooo much better than my Robinwing! If anything, I say the warrior should be tweaked a bit, because I know for a fact it doesn't match. This is so much better. xD Lighten up the shading on the back patch of white. Other than that, this is pretty dang amazing. 18:31, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wow, thanks Cloudy! <3 01:51, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

One-eye (A) - For Approval
This was done pretty quickly :P. Comments? 18:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think she should have the faint indication of a pupil in her eye, as well as her warrior and queen. 18:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this? 18:51, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yup! I think that's good 18:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the blind eye more glossy? Maybe not, as people tend to correct my critiques. 19:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, that's not half bad of an idea. But, how would someone go about that? Maybe adding white to the eye and blurring it, perhaps? I have no idea. 19:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at a few images, you could try making the pure white shine a little bigger and the edges of the eyes looked slightly tinged blue, but you don't have to do that, just what I observed :3 19:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried something like this. 16:44, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. 19:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (MCA) - For Approval
Please, someone remind me never to copy a complicated tabby again DX. I do not like this at all. The stripes all fail. 19:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white. 20:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure this needs to be uploaded over the old file. 20:33, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It does. Don't put caps on mca. 21:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white blends into the brown. Also, there is a lack of shading on the neck and chest. 21:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:14, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (A)~ CBA
I find it icky. Tell me how to fix it. 19:30, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I think this is amazing! Lighten the nose a bit, and smudge the orange into the grey on the foreleg closest to us. 19:34, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- 20:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me, CBA? 17:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thistlepaw (P3) (A) - For approval
Not sure uploading this will work. If it doesn't, let me try again. Anyway, that was quick. Comments? 19:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay it worked. :3 20:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  20:04, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:09, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, so sorry Cloudskye! I tried to edit, it restored changes and I clicked publish before I reallized it deleted your edit. Well, I changed the name, anyway. 20:10, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

It happens. I changed the file name at the top of the page for you. Now, darken the shading just a tad. 20:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Re-uploaded. Fixed shading. 20:24, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

In the fold in his neck, there appears to be some lighter pixils than the surrounding pelt. Make sure they match ^^ 22:43, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:14, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. <span style="">01:28 Sat Dec 17

In what way...? 03:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) ~ For Approval
Okay, you know me. I'm awful at spotting waste. xP I like this one! Comments? 21:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Haha, yep the waste. =P Anyway, make the earpink closest to us fill the entire ear then smudge the pelt into it. :3 21:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, there's waste around the tail and near the <--- ear. Also it needs to be a tad lighter. They eyes look like the pelt blurred into it a little, and the <--- side of each eye isn't colored in at all. There's some faded lineart around the tail. Define the shading a lot. Sorry I'm finding so many problems! 21:29, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my, there's also a lot of waste below the face and neck, around the paws, and under the front paw that is farthest from us. 21:31, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, she said she saw the waste. >.> 22:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make some of the dapples a little bigger and define the shading a little. Besides the suggestions, this is very good, phenominal job! 23:31, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger, and than smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">00:50 Sat Dec 17

I can't work on it now, probably not for a while. And I'm sorry there's so many things wrong with it. :/ 13:52, December 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blackstar (A) ~ For Approval
Here he is...I hate the earpink and the paws...! <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black paws 23:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also lighten them a touch, I can almost not see the lineart 23:01, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black part on the right ear a bit. Lovely! ^_^ 23:05, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''RE-UPLOADED. '''I darkened the ear-pink a bit too! <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  00:30, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the smudged ear-pink more realistic. <span style="">00:53 Sat Dec 17

The earpink is a little...bright...The correct color for white would be this:. 01:12, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, if you want to give her a colour example, you would go to the tutorials and you'll see there's an explanation there. I put a delete tag on your image you uploaded, as it's just taking up space. <span style="">01:15 Sat Dec 17

I asked if it was okay before I edited it, because i figured that it would be okay, since it's so small. And it's easier to post, instead of posting the link and giving instructions, and then Fire having to use snipping tool to get the image, put it on gimp or pixlr, and color choose the image. Firestar would just have to copy the mage and paste, then color choose. But okay, whatever, do what you want with that image as I didn't quite understand what you meant by putting a delete tag on it. 03:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. :D <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, if you go to the tutorial and read what it said, you can see that it is much easier than what you described. Anyways, smudge the paws so it looks more natural and the colors flow into one another better. Also, blur the earpink. Nice work. 04:07, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I failed at the paws :P <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:22, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, Firestar. Smudge the black in with the pelt on the closest ear. 19:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading as well. 19:11, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (A) - CBA
Comments? <span style="">23:41 Fri Dec 16

The only thing wrong with this I can see is darken the shading. This is so freaking beautiful, I think I'm gonna cry (not literally :P)  23:45, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I love you, Ivy <3 <span style="">23:53 Fri Dec 16

This is so wonderful! define the ear pink a little bit and blur it. *steals* This is my favorite! 01:05, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same as on the warrior  01:12, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I love this so much I'm going CBA on this  16:52, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (A) - For Approval
Since I redid his warrior, I thought I should go ahead and do the apprentice too. His design is based off of someone near and dear to me, so I'd rather not change the pattern. Comments for improvement? 16:51, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">16:54 Sat Dec 17

shading's fine, just do all the things we said on the tweak page - 17:03, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Sorry it's so ugly. Just noticed that i need to darken the base color, apologies. Feedback? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 16:52, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Color in the nose, blur the shading and darken it, and the earpink looks a little too neon. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 16:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

add transparency to it - 17:04, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also smudge/blur the stripes more. 19:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Get all the colours off his kit or warrior image. <span style="">19:47 Sat Dec 17

Dawnpelt (A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">16:58 Sat Dec 17

Define the shading a little, I think you over-blurred it. Breeze whisker  17:08, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just lowered the layer's opacity for the shading, because I blur at like 20. So I darkened it now. <span style="">18:16 Sat Dec 17

Mind lightening the eyes just a bit? They look a little brown. 19:03, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I see whatcha mean. I lightened them. Actually I made them more orange, and less brown, I hope that's ok. <span style="">19:51 Sat Dec 17

Ashfur (TC) (A) ~ For Approval
Tried to copy his warrior image markings. Comments? Breeze whisker  16:59, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

He's beautiful <3 Darken the shading. 18:58, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened it by about 10%. Breeze whisker  19:57, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) ~ For Approval
Yay space! All of the colors are from her warrior. Comments? 17:20, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

That's beautiful! <3 smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more, and define the shading jut a ad bit more. 19:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you :) 20:11, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (A) - For Approval
Phew. Just made it. Anyway, I must be obesessed with the male apprentice blanks. =P Comments? 18:49, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. <span style="">19:21 Sat Dec 17

You took my spot. xD Add a little more shading on the belly, mostly near the haunch :) 19:30, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why you take the last spot?? >.> Blur the shading to blend in more with the unshaded parts. 19:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)