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Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, can you Shelly? I don't want to waste time trying to get them right. 15:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

My pleasure. I re-uploaded it, here's the changes since they won't show regularly: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/9/96/20120402190120!Ferncloud.kit.png 19:02, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste down by her paw on ---> side. 20:45, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart also seems a little thick on her left hind paw... 01:54, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks Shelly~ 19:57, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's also waste on her paw on <-- side. 13:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked
Eh...I just realized I forgot her facial stripes...and the stripes on the lower part of her hind leg...I'll add those in in a bit. I'm the OA, and she needed stripes on her legs, tail, and face. Comments? 16:22, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added those in. Changes are here. 03:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little more? 01:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you centre the earpink a bit more please? 02:08, 04, 04, 2012
 * You don't have to if you don't want to. 02:52, 06, 04, 2012

Reuploaded. I'd rather not...it's about as centered as it can get. Changes are here. 14:06, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try to match the stripes on the kit? I really don't want to tweak them again, sorry. I also got rid of the spots among the stripes since, on a spotted tabby, the spots don't mix with the stripes on the points. (points being legs, tail, and face) 00:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think the stripes on the alt queen are fine. If memory serves, I think Leggy had this reserved for the stripes first, and this seems a lot easier to match on other images. No offense, but I can't really tell what the stripes are on the kit, and even if I could, it'd be hard to match since the kit blank is a lot smaller, then the queen. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Since Rainly's was reserved and posted first, I believe the kir should match this. o3o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) ~ Redone
White kitteh~ <333 OA was LightMoon with a redo by Rowan. Shading was flat. Comments for improvement? File changes aren't showing...yet. 19:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad? 20:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

And maybe lower the opacity of the shading ever so slightly? 23:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) ~ Withdrawn
Finally. I've been /so/ lazy about this...anyway, comments? :3 22:30, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Straighten out the stripes like his other images, fill in the entire ear with earpink as it seemed to blur away from the lineart, lower the opacity on the earpink, and define the shading on the tail and face/neck. 23:08, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on another charart.~ And I really don't like the pattern anyway. 12:47, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) ~ Redone
Uh yeah. I don't know how to make blossom shaped white patches, but this is all I got (inspired by Okami 8D) OA was Icestorm and Mintstarr. Comments? 23:36 Fri Apr 6

Make the white patches a bit more white and blur the tail shading~ 23:40, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This is as blurred as the tail will go now. 23:47 Fri Apr 6

This looks so much better now 8D. Make the ear pink a tad smaller. 23:50, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Silver 8D 23:58 Fri Apr 6

So purdy 8D Blur the neck shading >///< 02:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Misty <33 03:10 Sat Apr 7

Blur the image a very slight tad? :3 *steals and hugs* 17:33, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I kinda like how it looks o3o 17:34 Sat Apr 7

Give the tail shading some depth? It's a little flat 20:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:22 Sat Apr 7

Blur the earpink (To me it looks like it's popping out and not just on the image. That made no sense did it? xD) 12:02, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine, it's pretty blurred already. 18:54 Sun Apr 8

Shrewtooth (W) - Redone
Comments? :3 OA was Dappleclaw. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ;3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'highlights', darken the shading on the back, add depth to the eye (or define it), and to add on to what Skt said, make the earpink more triangular. 16:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC).

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 18:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

For some reason it's not reuploading and sparking Mooneh rage. >.> 18:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I got it. Re-uploaded. 18:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Move the ear pink more into the ear and lower the opacity a tiny bit. 19:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit as well~ 23:07, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading. 03:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Bouncefire (A) ~ Redone
Comments? 17:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely :3 Smudge the earpink a tad. 19:17, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/add shading to the ear farthest from us, and blur the haunch shading~ 20:02, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstar (RC) (L) - Redone
OA was Bracken- with a tweak by Iceheart. Comments? 04:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur chest the shading. 04:11 Sun Apr 8

Blur the tail shading. 05:19, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur Define the haunch shading "highlights". 13:18, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:49, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (W) ~ Tweaked
She needed a plumy tail. Breeze whisker  21:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

It kind of looks a bit boxish to me... Can you round the top? 21:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a bit too plumy... Maybe thin it out so it looks a bit like Squirrelflight's tail? 22:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nightcloud (W) ~ Redone
OA was Bramble, with either a tweak or redo from Rainface... I'm not sure. Anyways, the shading needed to be redone, and with black cats, it's annoying as all hell to tweak it. (Woo, more black cats <3) 21:42, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (Alt Ki) ~ Redone
OA is Dawnleaf, and it needed to be redone...for many reasons, but I CBA to list them all. 21:42, April 8, 2012 (UTC)