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Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Now blur the shading. 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Chest shading needs to be blurred and lightened. 11:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

^ Looks like someone forgot to sign! 00:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:44, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; other than that, I think its awesome! =3 21:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source. 23:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:12, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Re-uploaded. 11:23, October 12, 2011 (UTC)'''

Darken the shading a bit. 14:32, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 11:02, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the neck shading just a tad? 15:11, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the haunch shading and lighten the chest shading alot more. 23:49, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Applefur (W) - Tweaked
Alright, original artist was Honeyfur :3. Tweaked the shading, fixed the mottles, and altered the base color a tad to make her more brown. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:25, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading a lot. 22:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you mottled the earpink too. Define the earpink and make it a solid color. 02:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And there's a random stripe running down her back. Any way to get rid of? Sky- Stealing all ur  candy 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. '''better~? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:31, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred and the mottles look more like dapples. 20:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:31, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

While you're at it, blur the earpink as well, and make it a little more triangular. Looks good. 15:09, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It might just be me, but on her chest there's some pinkish stuff that makes it look like skin. Maybe remove those? 20:19, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded~! '''the pinkish stuff was some desaturated shading. I altered the base color because that was the only way to get rid of it without killing it T.T. I would prefer not changing the mottles. If I did, the entire image would have to be redone, which is more effort than I would like.

The shading needs to be lightened and blurred. The mottles need to be changed, though. 15:04, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Why do the mottles need to be changed? Elorisa~ 15:20, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

I've stated above. 15:41, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Is there really that big of a difference between mottles and dapples? There are around 3 images that have mottles similar to mine, and there was no fuss about them. Criminal Scum Stealing from the Imperial City;  one house at a time~ 15:51, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is a difference...and there is some blurred lineart. 14:03, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up about a pixel, and make it easier for someone to see it, 'cause I'm having a really hard time. 18:40, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (W) - Redone
I redid her apprentice, so I did this too. She needed to be longhaired, and the original artist was Sandwich989. 22:04, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink and redden it a tad and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:30, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 00:07 Mon Oct 17

Are you still working on this, Dapple? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:13, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (W) - Redone
ugh... why did I even make this? I suck at black cats! Anyway, OA was Spottedwing and then it was tweaked by Rainwhisper and Bramble. Redone as a longhair. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire pelt color, darken the highlights, lighten the shading, blur the highlights, make the ear pink smaller and redder. 01:29, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:40, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading, it was really bothering me, took all the colors from Darkflower's queen charart. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:19, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and make the ear pink smaller. 12:44, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:13, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 18:43, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 00:07 Mon Oct 17

Would it be possible to shrink the ears a tiny bit to match his description? I don't think it's needed, but if we're going for complete accuracy it might be a nice touch. 01:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Shelly, I had a look at his redone deputy and I think the ears are the same size. For now I'm gonna keep them the same size, but I'm gonna play around with the lineart.

I think there's some waste underneath the chin. 15:31, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Amberclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
Okay, so the original artist was Honeyfur, then Riverpelt, and Mintstarr then tweaked it. I toned down the opacity, thickened the stripes, and thickened the shading. 03:13, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely, Atelda! Darken the ear-pink and make it a bit smaller. Darken the shading on the back and around the head and define the stripes on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:20, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you. 03:49, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly make the stripes into thinner lines, instead of Y stripes? 12:44, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink, please! I love it! Leaf-storm,09:25,October 15,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I really hope this is what you mean Icy. Thanks Leaf-storm. 22:29, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

I like these stripes :3 Define them a bit? Looks bootiful! 05:23 Sun Oct 16

I think the stripes are fine, but that's just my opinion.- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 09:26, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also I made the "Amberclaw" part of the heading into a link to his page. I reckon brighten the highlights on his shoulder and haunch to match the other highlights.- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 09:28, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Kittycat79, the highligths need to be DULLED and TWEAKED. So she doesn't have to match the other highlights. 14:02, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:25, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, I define the stripes kind of...And the shading is blurred to the max. 19:41, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Pouncetail (W) - Redone
Tried matching it as best I could ^^' So anywho, redone as longhair and added stripes. Originally by Sandstar12. Comments? 18:16, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, blur thew htei, darken the shading, blur the shading, and liughten the ear pink. 22:28, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

^ ??? Anyways, there's some lighter pixels along his haunch, or is that part of the white? 23:11, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think she meant "blur the white" but her letters got mixed up. As for the white on the haunch, it wasn't supposed to be there but when I used gaussian blur the markings just kinda spilt onto the haunch. I got rid of it. 23:56, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a tad. 10:58 Sun Oct 16

Blur it as well. 17:23, October 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Leafpool (MC) - Redone
OA may have been Nightshine, but I believe she may have just renamed the file.. anyway, it needed to match her warrior image (Stripes re-done). Comments? 23:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add some highlights to her front left paw, it looks weird when all the other paws have highlights when that single paw doesn't. 03:00, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a tad. THIS IS BOOTIFUl <3 10:56 Sun Oct 16

CHOO....*grumbles at awesomeness* Maybe define the stripes at the bottom of her tail? They seem sorta hard to see...or maybe it's my horrendous vision....Sky- Stealing all ur  candy 13:06, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to match her warrior image, which it does. In fact, when comparing the two, I can see nothing wrong. Excellent job in matching it, Rainy. =) 18:38, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (W) - Redone
OA was Blackclaw09 and it needed to resemble Spottedleaf's image... I couldn't get it to look as amazing as Iceheart's image, but I tried... Comments? 05:47 Sun Oct 16

This is amazing! Define ear-pink please, Leaf-storm,9:13,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :3 10:53 Sun Oct 16

Good :) Define the mottles and blur the shading on the white. 14:00, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:58 Sun Oct 16

And it was my picture, too. Spottedleaf. Definet he mottles a TINY bit more. 01:57, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the darker patches a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:14, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspelt (Q)~ Tweaked
OA was me and she needed white. 11:13, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the white...I can't even tell where it is. 13:51, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The OA of the original file was Nightfall, not you. However, you made the current file. 14:34, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm, white is very bright, but changes arent showing :-) Leaf-storm,15:04,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:15, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (W) - Redone
Hey, Im warrior today! yahuu. I tryied match him with rogue charart, OA was Sandstar12 Leaf-storm,20:33,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Congrats, and job well done, Leaf. Lighten the shading a tad. 20:40, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Enlarge the chest highlight/thin out the shading around that area. I'm not sure if you use highlights or not, so choose either option that'll work best for you. ;) 20:56, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think I not understard you correctly Rainy.. hmm but reuploaded Leaf-storm,13:13,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (MC) - Redone
OA was Maplefern. It was down for tweaking but there was numerous problems with it, and I got the OK from Iceheart to redo it. His splotches needed to look like ketrel feathers, coloring needed tweaked, needed to be mottled, and the shading was non-existant in some places. I kept the herbs and eyes the same though. Coments for approval? 00:33, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Simply gawd-jus, dahling. Tone down the middle herb's colour a bit so it's less neon-green XD 00:34 Mon Oct 17

Reuploaded Sank yoo =)  00:37, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

you just won a free internet. smudge some of thw white splotches cuz some have harder edges -

Reuploaded Hehe =) Also, I almost forgot, if anyone wanted to know what kestrel I used to model the splotches after, here you go http://www.stanford.edu/group/stanfordbirds/other/gallery/image/American_Kestrel_detail.jpeg  00:48, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

...beautiful. JJust beautiful. 00:52, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! I love the hard edge look to it! Smudge the spots on the tail just a little to match the hard edge smudge on the body spots. That's all I see wrong with this, it's simply beautiful! -- 01:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lol I can't say thanks enough, so this is a thanks to all those I've received and to all the future ones I get =D  01:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with this, and I should approve it, but it's been up too early xD 01:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! All I can see is that the earpink is, well, hard to see.. could you define it a tad? :3 02:06, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:09, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Ivy! Make the ear-pink a bit paler/define it. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:16, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded hehe I just realized how furry the mottles make him look :3  02:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

o.0 I am so jealous. Perhaps blur the highlights a tad? Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 08:11, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:22, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (D) - Redone
- Don't ask me to change the stripes. He looks like a PICKUP TRUCK. A rusty, brown, old pick up truck. And I don't like this all that much - the colors clash x_____x Comments? 01:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but Bloo's was posted before your's and this is over the limit. Please repost this when there are less than 15 images. 01:48, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't over the limit...it was posted first. Why is it above Foxheart's, then? 01:52, October 17, 2011 (UTC) Derp. It was first in recent changes. Sorry. x3 01:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, things like this happen sometimes, but I could have sworn Foxheart's was there first. I'll check in the history but I think Foxheart's was here first. If I'm wrong then I'll admit my mistake. 01:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine now. Changing the heading. 01:58, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I knew I told y'all not to tell me to change the stripes...I changed the stripes. 8D 02:00, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok problem solved then :3 Define the M stripe on his forehead. Unless changes aren't showing 02:14, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Foxheart (W) Redone
first one in a while..Lets see if I can do this. Jeez, i need to lay of the tabbies for a while. OA=Fawnstorm - 01:41, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

And I forgot save teh layers, Im so smart, aint I? - 01:42, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, dear. Blu the shading, or the stripe that runs from the tail to the base of the tail - and the stripe that outlines the chest and back. 01:44, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea what you just said. what about the stripes again? - 02:00, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, forget about it i just redid the whole thing - 03:59, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste between the fore and back legs. Awesomeness. 15:31, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudtail (W) ~ Tweaked
Needed his shading re-done, and while I was at it, I tweaked the ear pink. I <3 Cloudtail, so I tried to make him, like, perfect. 02:10, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

He looks so handsome! There is a pure white pixil on his forehead, I think, and extend the shading to the underside of his tail as it appears lighter. 02:13, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

It's not pure white, Ivy, but a shade darker. Re-uploaded. 02:22, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

He twill soon be perfect...>:D I think the earpink needs to be bigger. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 06:11, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes, yes he shall. 14:57, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste behind the tail. Good job. 15:33, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (WC) (Mc) - Redone
Redone as a short hair. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 08:00, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the flecks look more more dark brown. 13:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Color in the eyes. XD This is gorgeous! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:13, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I was going to do this one, and decided against it. I'm glad I did. Blur teh ear pink. 14:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)