Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 81

Bramblestar (L) ~ Redone
Didn't exactly have much in terms of style to work with (not anyone's fault, the kit blank is so small), so I came up with this. Here have some changes.

Uh, could you make it match Tigerstar more? The entire thing of redoing Bramblestar was so that he matched Tigerstar closely, so... 21:13, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

I had to match Bramblestar not Tigerstar? The pattern for Bramblestar isn't the same as Tigerstar, therefore I have to match the image I was given.

But the entire agreement was that Bramblestar were to be redone only if he matched Tigerstar, and if the kit doesn't match it then ???? 21:26, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Well, as of this moment, there is nothing I can do about that but match the pattern I was told to match. I can't help that. I don't care either way, and I can match Tiger's leader pattern, if the kit image is changed as well. But I can only do that if the other image is changed. Duck's was posted and archived long before I posted this...

Would you mind darkening and thickening the shading a touch, Cloudy dear =3 17:32, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ehhh.

I thought we were supposed to match Hawkfrost, so I went by his kit??? But there are too many stripes on this one, just perhaps remove a few. Oh and just fwi I drew the kit's stripes while looking at hawkfrost, so this almost exactly matches Hawkfrost, besides the m, and one stripe on his right side. 21:21, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

I'd rather not remove the stripes, though. It would leave him almost stripeless, as the kit blanks are far too small to add very much detail to them. But where exactly am I supposed to remove the stripes? Like, telling me to remove some but not where doesn't exactly give me much to work with.

Could you define the tail shading just a bit? wowww he's a handsome guy, I like him =D 23:09, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm having issues shading this and not sure why... x.x Changes are here.

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Brook (Lo) Redone
okay 06:26, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad. 20:53, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Define and expand shading tons. gj 21:07 Tue Aug 27

Re-uploaded. I think the shading is fine 08:52, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Can you just define it on her stomach and haunch and face? 21:06, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe define the overall shading, I can't really see any of it except for on the legs. 01:07, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Skt? 17:01, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry, I've been quite busy 11:54, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

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Blackstar (Alt L) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to make fur more black, I just ran a burn tool over his fur. OA be Paleh. Comments? 16:17, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the highlights just a tad more, they seem a tad solid. This is great! Those eyes. *.* 16:21, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Reups  like some lyrics in a song I heard, "Wise eyes... you see the core in me..." 16:29, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

I can't tell, but is his nose completely black? It needs to be, as far as I know.

It is black. 00:25, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

No, I mean like #000000 black, as in same color as the lineart. I was always told it needed to be pure black... since black cats have black noses. Or at least that's what I was taught a long while back.

Reups ah 00:47, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the highlights? I thought they were fine before. 06:00, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

I think they're fine. 11:16, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with legs - they were fine before. 14:35, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 15:00, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Why exactly was this uploaded again without it being reserved?? You changed your reservation without withdrawing this image. I actually think this should be declined, as although it's been over 24 hours, you reuploaded an image without having it reserved.

Wait - when I put in Tigerstar I meant to remove the Leafstar one, not this one. I'm sorry, it was a mistake. 20:52, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Eh we'll just archive this it's fine.

Sedgewhisker (A) - Redone
Last OA be me. Redone to match. Colors are all the same as her warrior. 22:09, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

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