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Tuna (Ro) - For Approval
Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading 21:36, 9/07/2017

Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading

Renamed.

Define the shading a bit on the front leg furthest from us, and the light on the front leg closest to us. 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

think you can make the shading by the hind leg curve a bit? it looks add cutting right across the thigh. 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Try and curve the haunch shading more - still looks the same in cutting across the haunch. I also think that the light needs to be defined on the the < side of the cat, and definitely expanded on the face.

Define the ear pink. Good job. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:24, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on all legs/paws, and on the tail

could you expand the shading on the back and flank? 12:11 Mon Sep 11

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

He needs to be a tabby (unless my cite is wrong, then ignore this)

I have the ebook version of Tigerheart's Shadow, so I can't check. But if somebody who does have the solid version can verify it, I'll add it. I'm assuming you have it, as you added the site? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:10, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

I checked it. He is confirmed as a tabby. 21:27, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ahhh I lurve him with stripes --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:43, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws again

Define the shading depth on the tail and hindleg closest to us, just a tad. 20:55, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

think you can connect some of the tabby stripes to each other and the legs and back and tail? they look a bit more like mottled markings to me as they are. 22:42, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I changed the stripe pattern and shading, though I think now I maybe should have tried to change the previous one. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe connect them on the back like how a ticked tabby would be. They still look like they're all over the place. Maybe add a dorsal stripe and add more stripes to the face, legs, and tail? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 20:16, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the light on the front paws a little more, and maybe smooth the stripes a tad? 0:40 Thu Sep 14

Define the earpink^

Reups How do you facial markings? --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:32, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

there's waste around the ears

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:50, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

It's still there, it's like a triangular patch between the ears

There's also some above the nose

Reups

Define the shading on the ears^

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 23:15, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly taper the stripes, especially on the face? They look paintbrush-y, and people have been told to adjust that before. 01:16 Wed Sep 20

Still see waste around the ears. I can redline if you'd like.

\Reups' The waste snuk back in there in the last reups. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:23, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

could you brighten the earpink? it looks a little too grayish. 23:56 Thu Sep 21

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:16, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

I can't really see the earpink. 04:56, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

Could you taper the facial stripes more, or possibly make them thinner? It looks a little too thick right now. 15:13, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 17:30, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

https://imgur.com/a/MEbHZ The red circled area is shading that needs to be smoothed out. The blue pixels need to be black. The green pixel is waste. 13:15, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 15:59, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink slightly, and I think some of the tail stripes are leaking away from the lineart on the bottom side

The shading along the side of hte hip seems thicker at the top than the bottom, which doesn't seem right if it should be lighter on the top. Maybe thin out the shading there along the top? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:22, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:08, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a little on the legs and tail, I'm having a little trouble distinguishing it from the light in those areas. 20:01, September 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed out on the > side of the face, and I can't see the shading on the legs and tail still.

Shanty (Ki) - For Approval
Wow how did I never post this. Everything from her kittypet. 01:12 Wed Sep 20

So adorable. Poor Shanty.... can you make the stripes on the back right leg a bit more visible?

So beautiful, so Shanty. Smooth out the shading a smidge. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:43, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out/blur the shading a bit on the right front leg. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:26, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:27, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

Will upload tomorrow. Been really busy. <span style="">01:47 Tue Sep 26

Reuploaded This shading is kinda awkward to smooth. <span style="">14:24 Tue Sep 26

Could you smooth the shading on the > front leg? Looks pretty :)

Diesel (Lo) ~ For Approval
Geez this was hard. Also will upload later to tweak shading.

On the kp (i know it's not approved yet, but it was the first one uploaded) the stripes on the body and tail are pointed the other direction.

i think the stomach shading is leaking near the front leg <span style="">05:06, 9/20/2017

If the kittypet was uploaded first, shouldn't this be short furred as well? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 05:35, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Star had no way of knowing that Broken would have her image be short furred. Give her a bit of time to fix things up to match, it hasn't been long since she uploaded. I'm not trying to be mean in any way, just trying to explain why it's going down like this.

Broken's is posted first, therefore she holds the master pattern claim here. All Star would really need to do is change the pelt length anyways. Everything else looks pretty good to me, in terms of matching. He is in fact shown with the shorter fur (compared to Graystripe, who has long fur), hence why I added it to his description.

the haunch stripes don't really match. i know its a different angle, but i think its missing a stripe or two. see here http://vvcap.com/oRLXOjslnEm <span style="">03:12, 9/21/2017

I think the top stripe on the --> front leg should be a bit smaller. And sharpen both stripes on the front leg. 13:11, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Sorry for the wait! I got swamped in schoolwork and stuff.

the thicker stripe on the ---> front leg needs to stretch up the arm further. <span style="">06:15, 9/22/2017

re-up

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us? 00:58, September 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail please. --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:11, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

re-up eh.

Tuna (Ki) ~ For Approval
Another one to my kit army. 14:09, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

''Dies of cuteness proximity. ''Very nice job! Could you please define the tail shading? ErmineGlow (talk) 16:00, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink^

Reuploaded Thanks! I just moved the earpink above the shading layers. 18:10, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe take off like one or two stripe off of the > side of the cat, because they only cover up to the haunch on the other image. rn on this it goes up a bit more than that (and as the haunch doesn't really show too much on the kit anyway, only a few stripes should be visible

Reuploded I got rid of one stripe. I think that's enough. 23:06, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

Littlecloud (Star) ~ For Approval
If the shading's too dark, I'll lower the opacity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:23, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

The tail-tip needs to be the base color ^^ This is very good! 02:17, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks !! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 23:47, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little?

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:13, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

Polly (Ki) - For Approval
that wasn't so bad. if anyone thinks the paws look a little too gray (because they kinda do) i'll fix it

Great job! Could you please define the shading on the leg closest to the tail? ErmineGlow (talk) 22:28, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

reups Thanks!

They do look a little gray tbh...

reups removed toes to enhance whiteness + changed the flank pattern a little to resemble marbled tabby

Smooth out the stripes. They're a bit smoother on the kittypet.

reups i tried

Birdy (Ki) ~ For Approval
Eh. 13:38, September 26, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe dull the color a little bit? I think these roughly match the colors on the images Skye posted of the color version of Graystripe's Adventure (Birdy's the third kit, I think)? Even if not, this seems a little too yellowish to be golden-brown. 20:07, September 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the link, Ivy! That really helped. 22:35, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

Little Mew (Ki) ~ For Approval
<span style="">20:20, 9/27/2017

I'm not sure if it's supposed to be like that, but could you define the light on the back paw? --ErmineGlow (talk) 23:20, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

its supposed to be like that <span style="">23:21, 9/27/2017

Define the belly shading a bit? 12:15, September 28, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. <span style="">18:31, 9/28/2017

Growler (KP) - For Approval
idk man, as I said when I edited PCA's reservation table, if someone has an issue with me re-reserving it with a new date, I'll address that and use the original date (the 17th) instead. Regardless, I did wait a few days to see if someone would claim it, and they didn't.

Great work, old friend :) Perhaps add the tiniest bit of shading to the back, the whiteness is pretty bright. Ah, maybe do some blurring to the patches as well? 02:00, September 29, 2017 (UTC)

Flamenose (W) ~ For Approval
wanted to get this up since the reds are apparently alts, and I am aware of the name. 19:01, September 28, 2017 (UTC)