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Onestar (Alt W) ~ Declined
Should match his description from TUG CloudymoonTheCat

Hm, might just be me or the coloring, but the shading along the lineart seems to be leaking pretty much everywhere. 15:34, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

You did the stripes amazingly! But, Define shading all over except for the tail. And since you're still a kit iirc, until a kit is promoted to apprentice it should be For Evaluation, but correct me if I'm wrong. SquidwardPlays 15:50, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

On the topic of shading, is it tinted? Tinting it with a color might help me see it better. Potato Flakin (talk) 16:16, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

It would be 'For Evaluation', yes. Also, make the stripes thinner and add more of them, per the leader alt it needs to match

There needs to be more white in between the light brown. The leader alt also appears to not have any dark brown on it, so remove that. I forgot to say this is lovely Cloudymoon!Potato Flakin (talk) 19:29, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

In 'dark brown' do you mean the stripes or the base colour? Because he Have dark stripes if you zoom in CloudymoonTheCat

Lemme rephrase that- lighten them, they are way darker that the leader. I meant the stripes.--Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the pale parts to match the leader and make the tail become lighter as it approaches the tail tip. 14:39, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I re-uploaded it - I tried to define the shading, and I changed the base colour and the stripes and swirls. CloudymoonTheCat

You're getting there! Warm the brown (lighten it) a bit more to match the leader, which I'll link here. Can you also whiten the white parts? They look cream.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The overblurred look on this image may be a result of putting everything on the same layer. Are you using multiple layers?

I do use multiply layers. I'll try to fix everything that you said :) CloudymoonTheCat

Try using pure white?

Define tail shading. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [07:09, 12/30/2018 ]

Re-uploaded it again CloudymoonTheCat

Uh Oh! It appears you alligned the image. Make sure when you reupload remove the "|left|". Can you dethumb this real quick?Potato Flakin (talk) 14:40, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

nah they just thumbnailed it. make sure not to upload them as a thumbnail. I've removed it for you, but keep that in mind when uploading more chararts. The stripes also taper more, and they aren't as thick and blurry as they are here. (sorry if that seemed rude) Taper out the stripes, and maybe smudge them. Expand the shading as well, and smooth it out.

Still working?

Yes, I'm sick so it'll take me some time :/ CloudymoonTheCat

From my comment above, do you want continue working on this? The warrior blanks are going to be redone, so you may want to finish this, but it also will be redone in the future (by you or anyone else.) Would you still want to work on this? 04:04, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Can I keep working on it? I'm really sorry that I didn't responded, I was sick and I barely moved out of bed :/. I still wish to keep working on it :) CloudymoonTheCat

A new blank is being made for the warrior rank. I suggest you to claim and continue it when the new blanks are approved.

That^^ And additionally, while I’m sorry it had to be declined, to prevent this from happening again - keep in mind the upload time rules we have for these things. Kits and apprentices get 10 days, which is an extension in itself from the normal week that’s standard. I’d recommend trying to start an image when you know you’ll have the ability to upload timely, or to withdraw and reserve it when you are ready to continue and complete. 14:16, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Littlecloud(mc alt 2)~for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​​​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to the alt mentioned above by Echo, this would have to be renamed File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. Mind fixing that real quick Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^ 17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The darker stripes on the face should be thinner, and all of the stripes should be more jagged^^ There's also a slight layer of texture going underneath them, on the mca ~

Define your light source. Its pretty hard to distinguish it. If you need help with it, you may find the Apprentice Tutorials helpful. <span style="">16:43 Sun Dec 30

Still working? 00:05, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

If you are still working, there's this area outside the right hind leg that shouldn't be filled in. I'll send you a screenshot later when I have time to get on the computer.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:26, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go!Potato Flakin (talk) 04:24, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, sorry for the break, I just had thingd going on, and life, but I got it up! : )<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:57, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, that shading tho! I dont know what I was doing, but I fixed the shading<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yes, much better. There are some things that still need to be addressed, but take your time. The stripes need to be smudged and sharpened a bit more. I would recommend you take the colors of his apprentice, or medicine cat apprentice. The earpink is much lighter on the other images, and the two stripes on the face are blotchy. Seperate them so they are two stripes, then smooth and sharpen them to match the kit. Whiten the white, and define the shading (have you tried tinting your shading? It's magic) This is very good Owlbite, you are doing well.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I sort-of like it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite! Whiten the white on the legs, thin out the face stripes, and define the shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:12, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, face stripes cant get any thiner. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:26, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I understand. Where's your lightsouce here? If there is one please define it. Potato Flakin (talk) 04:29, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading too? I can't tell where the light source is either, but I think that may just be because I can't make out where a lot of the shading is. 13:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC) I will definitely the light, but look at the light in the eyes.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 16:38, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't have white markings or pale around the earpink^

Lighten the earpink a little more, and remember, don't stress, the lightsource and other things are and easy fix, take your time.=)Potato Flakin (talk) 01:36, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

spooky, look at the offical art, look, there is white marks. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:59, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I cut the white down, but it is there on the offical art, and if I define the shading, it will make it look... just... bad. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:06, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I’m quite sure it’s supposed to be that pale color around the ears. I matched the same image you’re matching to when I did the other images in this alt set

Re-up, okay.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 03:03, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Owlbite, don't kill me, but I'm still very confused about your lightsource. I cannot see where the shading is.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:30, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that help? I removed some shading from the direct place of the light sorce, wich needed to be fixed anyways.<font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:00, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the shading darker? i think it'll make it more visible. that pattern is looking good 11:44, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Pose is from a reference, I can show it if need be. <span style="">20:10 Wed Jan 2

Sun these are absolutely astounding! Could you add either a tag or bell to the collar? There’s usually one. :) 20:16, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

Soooo cute! Can you move the collar a little bit down the neck? It kinda looks like it's choking them right now.. ^^' Also, the forearm closest to us looks overly thick. 23:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

woah!! love everyhting on this charart, i cant wait to see the next one. Starclanwilldarkme2 (talk) 00:16, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing, Sun! Could you possibly make that <-- front leg a bit longer to match the length of the other? It seems a bit shorter. 03:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the lineart on the hind paws just a bit? 03:56, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

The front paw facing us feels a bit too chubby compared to the rest of the legs. Also, while I do understand what you're going for with the lil fatty fluff on the haunch to define the tummy, it looks a bit off. Plump cats don't really have their fat protruding past their haunch, and with them laying down like this, the fat would go lower to touch the ground bc of gravity. These are super cute ;; I adore the toe beans so so much!! —​​​​​​

Could be my personal preferences, but could you make the long haired's fur less.. spiky and give it more variation?

Tribe of Endless Hunting Blanks ~ For Approval
Alrighty, I'm all freshened up and ready for these. ^^ 21:53, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Do you think you can enlarge it? 21:54, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, I forgot to mention I was planning on doing that. ^^' 21:56, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups How's this size wise? 03:25, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Great! Do you think you could add a mouth? 04:44, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you possibly make the fur taper out a little bit more on the long haired blank, specifically talking about the 3 hairs on the cheeks. Also idk if its just me, but I feel like the front leg in the back is visibly thinner than the front front leg 05:09, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

I love these. Can you give the short-hair a cheek, since the long-hair already has one? :D 18:34, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 20:03, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Back at it again with some redlines for you-- —​

Reups Thanks! Much appreciated. 02:35, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Push the neck forward a bit. Right now the cat would be straining its neck very hard. Also shrink the length of the leg on the ground, it's too big.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:07, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the neck is fine. It doesn't look like the cat is straining since it's just looking up. 15:29, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

The short-haired far front leg looks a bit too chubby at the bottom. try making the paw angle more.. sharp? 15:32, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

The neck is fine. My own cats have strained their neck far worse than this LOL —​​​​​​

Reups 21:31, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

They are really coming along! The short-hair's chest looks a bit pointy. xD 03:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reups lol 17:45, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

can you maybe add some fluff to the neck? also the front leg thats furtherest away from us looks a bit too thick. (it's especially prominent on the shorthair.) love how they're looking like they're about to jump at a fly tho LUL 18:34, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm maybe do the same thing you’d done to the shorthaired’s chest to the long one in terms of general shape - it seems a little more pointy/angled than the other. I also think the shorthaired haunch is a little big, it hits the same points the long one does, but it shouldn’t go as far because the long one has fur making it go out further

Reups Like this? 03:33, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

The leg and the chest should be connected on the longhair. —

while theres a comment here ill just point out that theres a white spot between the legs that on the short hair blank should be transparent. love these blanks, btw 11:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

or i guess looking at it, it might be the back leg. jsut thought id point it out– if its intentional ignore my previous comment 11:58, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (Alt Ro) ~ CBA
20:57, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is cute, can you smooth the facial shading? 13:31, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the leg shading? Malina457 (talk) 16:58, January 6, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Reups 20:40, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? lovely shading btws

Rain (TB) ~ For Approval
喔你們好

Nice. Smooth out the belly shading a bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:19, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I really love this!!! But, I am a bit confused on the light source here. It seems to be coming from an angle behind and above the cat, but the tail shading does not correlate with the rest of the shading in that case. 02:58, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail Malina457 (talk) 04:13, January 7, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Purdy design! There's waste between the hind legs. 03:27, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

There's a weird light brown line next to the haunch.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:32, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think that's part of the mud spots, Potato. ​

Squirrelflight (A Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I know the shading on the haunch needs fixed so please don't comment on it. 14:19, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

White looks a little cream.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:37, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. Well, the official image does have it kinda cream, not really white, though it could be lightened a tad it'd still be cream. Also think you could recede it on the tail a tiny bit, doesn't seem to go as far down what it's supposed to match

I'd rather not change the colors as they were colorpicked directly off the image. Yeah, i thought there was too much on the tail, ill fix that as soon as I can. 00:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the shading depth/expand the shading on the shoulder and back? 03:26, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out all of the shading? I know you said not to comment on certain aspects, but I feel the entire image could use some smoothing out, in addition to Vec's comment.

Windstar (Alt. Lo) - CBA
All colors from other images. Comments? 23:11, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:39, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the facial shading, and the light on the < most back leg?

Define the earpink too.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:31, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:39, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little more. I can hardly see it.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:03, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:27, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna get shot for this, but I like this. CBA?

Flametail (Alt. Star) ~ For Approval
Tried to match the medicine cat, hope it's not too far off! Eggheart (talk) 03:14, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's not, actually! Just gotta remember to add the texture, since his MC does have it. ​​​

I really like the eyes! :D Maybe thicken the stripes just a bit to match? 03:23, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the body shading. This is lovely Eggheart!Potato Flakin (talk) 03:34, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Eggheart (talk) 03:36, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly this is very good, and you clearly know what you're doing. I'll promote you into an apprentice promptly.

There's meant to be a dorsal stripe on this set, could you add that? You can't really see very much of it, but the spine definitely has a stripe.

Add a little tad of shading on the face goignout to the chin; looks a tad flat there

not sure if it was intentional or not but theres a little bit of black leaking from the (our perspective) right eye. if thats shading, expand it and make it look smoother or if not I guess... erase it 11:56, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Rabbittail (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Another short-hair. Tried to match with the tunneler? I'm gonna try to get this up before the blank is redone. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 08:05, 1/08/2019 ]

Smooth out the shading, please. ​​

Reups -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:50, 1/08/2019 ]

define shading on the back legs and lighten it on the "front front" leg (lol) 11:47, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'd say lighten the shading a little bit overall. 13:29, January 8, 2019 (UTC)