Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval 1

Oakheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Since Frostheart agreed.. I decided to do it. I admit, this is the first one I've done from scratch. So, comments anyone? Cloud skye  16:46, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pelt color lighter and more brown. Make the earpink smaller and get rid of the blurred lineart on the ear. 20:44, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the highlights that leaked onto the lineart on the tail. 00:08, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. . . how do you not do a charart from scratch? o.o Anyways, the highlights are a but too bright and the ear pink is too big. 01:27, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think she means not having to copy the pattern of stripes or color from a previous charart of the same character. XD Anyways, nice job! Maybe make it just slightly closer to Sasha's color. Looks a bit too orange in my opinion right now. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:49, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, that's exactly right. And what I did was I used Sasha's coloring, since it says she's a tawny, but I darkened it ever so slightly. Re-uploaded. Does it look any better? As for the ear pink, I took it directly off of Sasha's rogue image, so I hope it works. Cloud skye  19:02, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights on the chest, haunch and tail; they are way too bright. 19:24, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken them. 20:56, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Cloudy! Center the earpink. 04:49, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Highlights darkened, blured and ear pink fixed. Comments? Cloud skye  12:40, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading, make the ear pink a little smaller. Night shine  01:00, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a tad more and add a clearer highlight to the top of the tail. 02:03, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Back shading blurred, ear pink fixed and I added a highlight to the tail. Cloud skye  12:47, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/lighten where the shading meets the highlights by the haunch on the back. 02:48, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading and darken highlights.  Mistfire Spring rainfalls  16:12, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I suck at this, honestly. But does it look better? Cloud skye  ♥ Evanescence ♥ 18:25, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think the highlights have been blurred too much. Sometimes that happens; they get discoloured. You may want to choose a lighter shade of your pelt colour and pencil it over the highlights, then blur that, but right now they're turning greeny-gray XD --   Wildheart  In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:55, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is what happens when people tell me to blur to damn much. I'm just going to re-do this. Cloud skye  ♥ Evanescence ♥ 12:34, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the image. Jeez, this is an annoying color to work with. Cloud skye  ♥ Evanescence ♥ 12:58, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. 22:55, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm having ear pink issues. but anyways, Re-uploaded. Does it look any better at all? -- Cloud skye  12:46, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I guess. I can fix it for you if you want... 20:35, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the highlights and thin out the shading on the chest. --  Wildheart  In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:42, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and if this is the tawny alternate, make this a little warmer in tone. Maybe a bit more yellowy-orange-ish. --  Wildheart  In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:43, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

I took the color straight from Sasha, who is tawny colored. Re-uploaded. -- Cloud skye  16:06, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look like Sasha's colour anymore. It looks like a sickly light brown. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫   05:07, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm losing my mind trying to get this right. I re-did it, and this time, there is almost no shading. I had to darken my highlights though. -- Cloud skye  12:59, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oakheart is a boy. Darken the ear pink. 19:53, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Not a boy, a tom. :P And the ear pink could be smaller. 22:31, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

And blurred. Where's your light source? wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫   23:49, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm worried...bluefur and oakheart are both she-cats now, and they had kits....im really scared, change th gender from a she-cat to a tom. Maple♥ pool  I'm a star gazer~ 09:45, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular and even. 17:49, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry about the lineart. I wasn't paying attention wehen I opened up the file. I fixed it and I'm working on the ear pink now. I'll have it up momentarily. -- Cloud skye 13:34, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gender issue fixed and ear pink fixed. I was working on a laptop without a mouse when I did it the first time, so I had to re-do it. -- Cloud skye  16:18, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The earpink still is hard to see. Darken it. 16:54, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a bit and darken the earpink.  Mistfire Spring rainfalls  17:28, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Highlights/ear pink darkened. I won't darken the highlights anymore, because then it won't look like there is any there. -- Cloud skye  17:43, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

The highlight on the shoulder looks like it's too high. Maybe move it down a bit if possible. And the ear looks like it either wasn't shaded, or it has a highlight on it, and I don't think there should be, so darken that. Otherwise, this looks GREAT! :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:07, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I fixed it. Does it look better? -- Cloud skye  12:26, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink more.  Mistfire Spring rainfalls  15:51, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I won't darken it anymore. It'll turn purpleish. I think it's too dark to begin with, but, eh. Oh, well. -- Cloud skye  16:22, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and shading/highlights. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 05:56, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ear pink blured and shading/highlights. -- Cloud skye  17:21, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the pelt colour around the earpink and enlarge the highlights/thin out the shading. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫   01:03, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Around the ear pink? Okay. I did what I could, although I don't really understand what you want done. Re-uploaded anyways. -- Cloud skye  19:06, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 22:32, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay. Better? -- Cloud skye  17:40, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. Blur the shading. 23:23, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the earpink a tad more. 00:26, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay. I've blurred the shading about as much as Photoshop'll let me without killing the lineart. As for the ear pink, I also blurred it, but not a whole lot. -- Cloud skye  16:31, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I don't see a light source in this. -- Night  shine  00:49, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Shrink the earpink. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 03:07, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and fix the eye lineart. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 03:08, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops. I thought I fixed that. Sorry. As for light source, I really don't get what you mean. (*is confused*), and I shrunk the earpink as well.Re-uploaded -- Cloud skye  17:28, May 2, 2011 (UTC) I like the highlights--Sandstormrocks32 23:00, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if the changes aren't showing or what, but the eyes still have two extra pixels. Check out an approved pic for a resource. Blur the shading/highlights. A light source helps you to gfigure out where your shading and highlights should go. In this case, you don't really have one, so your shading/highlights don't make a whol lot of sense. They're not terrible, but they're not exactly sensical either. I would recommend using this guide for shading. It always works for me. }  wild    heart   ~     01:54, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I started over, and used Nightshine's tutorial on shading. Does it look better? I must say, I really understand it a whole lot more since I read that. -- Cloud skye ♫  The   Wind   Waker   ♫ 18:29, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the changes aren't showing up on the page, but the actual file does show what I did. -- Cloud skye ♫  The   Wind   Waker   ♫ 18:10, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a lot better :D Blur the highlights. 21:53, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! I blurred what I could, and I also enlarged the ear pink every so slightly. It looked like nothing was there. xD -- Cloud skye ♫  The   Wind   Waker   ♫ 16:32, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the red waste around the fuzzy part of his chest. -- 16:28, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Blur the earpink and the shading/highlights. }  wild    heart   ~     01:26, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

@ Ivystripe: There is no red waste. I zoomed and everything, but I didn't see anything. And Re-uploaded. -- Cloud skye ♫  The   Wind   Waker   ♫ 16:24, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well then it might just be my computer...-- 16:50, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and define the earpink a tad -- 16:52, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does it look better now? -- Cloud skye ♫  The   Wind   Waker   ♫ 17:06, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is too creamy, not tawny. And the highlights are blotchy. Oh, and if I mess up the page with this page, sorry, but my computer is messing up :P. MINTSTARR  Want to eat orange ice cream?  21:23, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest taking the tawny color from one of the tawny alts, such as Birchfall, or Tawnypelt. 22:21, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's still red waste. I can see it. I'll fix it for you, if you want. And do not take the tawny colour from Tawnypelt's alt. She is WAY too ginger, but nobody corrected it because Bramble approved it without the CBA process. Blur the shading significantly. My offer still stands. }  wild    heart   ~     02:52, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry about the "offer" comment. I offered to blur a charart for somebody, and I thought it was you, but apparently not haha.... Anyway, I'll blur it for you if you'd like. }  wild    heart   ~     03:00, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart, please. HELP. I'm having so many issues with this cat, but I'm not thinking of withdrawing it. I'd rather get help instead of messing it up even more. -- Cloud skye ♫  The   Wind   Waker   ♫ 12:20, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get right on it. Do you use layers? If so, please email me the image (my email is on my userpage), and I'll do it that way. If not, I'll just download the image myself, and fix it as it is. 01:58, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ...I got bored XD I had to tweak the shading and highlights to get them to match in intensity, so I didn't just blur. I hope you don't mind. 04:26, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, thank you and thank you again! It looks wonderful. -- Cloud skye ♫  De  le  te   ♫ 12:50, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. I'm glad I could help! =) 06:56, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look tawny anymore. It's more of a cream colour now. Make it more tawny-ish. Other than that, the shading and ear pink are perfect. -- Night  shine  21:24, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

If I change the pelt color, it'll ruin what Wildheart did. I'd have to re-do the image. -- Cloud skye ♫  De  le  te   ♫ 13:26, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

You could colourize it, I suppose. 02:57, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Colourize? English please. Honestly, I think it looks fine, considering it looks very similar to Sasha's, and she's a tawny, according to the article. -- Cloud skye ♫  De  le  te   ♫ 17:16, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Whatever program you use, there should be an option to make your brush opaque. That's the way I'd do it, but I don't know if it would throw off the shading. -- 23:10, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudskye told me to tell you guys that she won't be able to work on Oakheart's alt. image until it was Monday at where she lives. 11:57, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Rainey. As she said, I wasn't able to work on it. I was ill. But, now, I'm somewhat better. Re-uploaded. Does it look better? I tried to fix it the best I could without killing the shading. -- Cloud skye ♫  De  le  te   ♫ 16:41, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmmm what program do you use? If you use gimp, there's a VERY simple way to fix the color without doing anything to the shading, and if you don't, I could help you out. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:26, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest more. Wild fire  12:03, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, I use Photoshop. The school's computers have them, so... -- ◄ Shattered ƒlamε ► ♫  Sin   With   A   Grin   ♫ 12:24, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

I see waste around the top part of his tail, and this time I don't think it's my computer. -- 23:52, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

No. You're not seeing things. I know it's there, and I'm going to fix it when I get back to school. I don't have an image editor on my home computer, and I refuse to use Pixlr.  Sk ye  Me ow 00:02, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded... Eh. (Changes may not show for a bit)  Sk ye  Me ow 18:12, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure what photoshop can do honestly, I've never used it. But I could help you change the color if you want. If you gave me a color I could try and match it best I could and it wouldn't do anything to the shading. :) If you don't want me to help that's perfectly fine too though. ^^ ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:51, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck. 02:06, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

@ Paleclaw: Thanks for the offer, and I'll take you up on it. Photoshop is a image editing program, but you have to pay for it. That's how I usually work on my images. Try and make the color match something like #c9a36d. It's obvious the pelt color is too light, and that hex color I picked looks okay.  Sk ye  Me ow 22:42, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

MAake the ear pink more apink and slightly larger. Also, possibly blur the shading slightly. Leopard claw Eyes watching in the Dark…  08:18, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink around the top part of it. -- 15:46, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded for you. Is that good? I can change it more if you want. The only problem that happened was the earpink color got changed a bit too, so you MIGHT wanna change it if you don't like it as this color. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥

I dunno it looks kind of weird now... too dark and gray-ish. If you're still working on this for Cloudskye, Paleclaw, maybe you should change it to be bit redder. 00:39, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded again - I reddened it a bit, but the changes aren't showing. If you wanna see it, go to the image page and the picture right below the current one is the real image. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:52, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

I like it better =) Very pretty. I see nothing wrong. 03:55, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw... Thanks! It looks amazing!!!!  Sk ye  Me ow 12:19, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. :D Maybe the earpink could be a bit neater, but other than that, its perfect! 00:22, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

No problem at all. ^^ Glad I could help. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:56, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, do I have to fix the ear pink? I really don't want to tamper with what's already there. And Nightshine said a while ago that the ear pink was good - and I haven't touched it since then.  Sk ye  Me ow 12:45, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well Nightshine's the leader, and the Clan Leader's word is law xD Otherwise, I think its ready! 23:00, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur the shading some more and this will be ready. 19:52, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, everyone. I graduated on Friday, and I haven't been on since. Anyways... Re-uploaded. I AM NEVER DOING TAWNY CATS AGAIN!  Sk ye  Me ow 16:05, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is perfect. sorry if I sound like an idiot for asking this, but I don't even know what color tawny is, so I'll assume this is tawny. 16:10, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights/shading curvier on the tail. 03:19, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head. 01:46, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Huh. I thought it looked fine. But, if that's what you want, then I guess I'll have to do it.  Sk ye  Me ow 15:30, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Does that seem better, SquirrelFlame?  Sk ye  Me ow 15:42, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! It's great! 16:18, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred at the top of the head.Other than that it's great! --Dovey Newbie! 20:21, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and add more highlights. This look ready 20:46, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of blurred lineart on the forehead, and darken the shading, as suggested by Sandstormrocks32.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 05:43, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is far too red, make it pinker slightly. Other than that, good! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 17:03, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pinkish, slightly purplish. Mist: <font color="Teal">Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 18:45, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 06:50, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Guys, just letting you all know I am still working on this, but, re-uploads will be slow, due to the fact I can only get on every other day...if that. Please don't decline this. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Sk ye  Me ow 17:28, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still too purple. Make it pink. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:39, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

I never re-uploaded it, Leopardclaw. xD^ But, now I did. Re-uploaded. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 12:13, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? 00:57, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:00, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. Also make it a teeny bit smaller and blur. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  00:56, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 20:07, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, yeah. I just can't get online every day. I'll fix it now. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 21:46, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the tail it too dark. Lighten it. and the ear pink is too long. 15:12, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-loaded. Does it look better? Sorry for taking so long. Something came up and I wasn't able to get online. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 18:18, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great, other than the fact that the lineart is blurred on the head.-- Paulmer 15:09, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading seems a bit blotchy, so maybe blur it? :3 -- 19:51, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

The shaded part of the tail looks like it has a lighter part, make sure to blend it out :3 -- 16:49, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the earpink a bit? 18:04, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

I know this has been discussed before, but this is cream colored, not tawny. I don't want to post the image again, but scroll down to Foxleap's alternate warrior being approved, and you'll see Tawnypelt's alternate. Use that as a guide. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  18:11, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't cream colored. I was told NOT to use Tawntpelt's alternate as a basis, because she is way too ginger. I believe Wildheart said that, and she's someone I respect. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 00:49, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does it look better? I did my best with the ear pink - it's not my forte. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 01:43, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Blur the highlights and the shading by the neck a bit and darken the shading on the tail. Looks really good! Great job! -- 02:07, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Cherryfur! Re-Uploaded. Does this suit your fancy? <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 02:19, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, it's looking good! There's some blurred lineart on the head, make the earpink a bit bigger, and blur the highlights just a TAD bit more! :) -- 13:50, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading. -- 14:35, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. So? How about it? Also, Cherry, I don't have highlights. I tried a different method of shading, one that doesn't involve highlights. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Ta lk 01:24, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! ^^ Though there still seems to be blurred lineart on the head, but maybe I'm just seeing things. Also, blur and maybe darken the earpink just a tad. Good job! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Agreeing with comment above. Other than that, I think its ready for CBA! 17:06, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please tell me it looks better...? I suck at ear pink... <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Ta lk 02:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whiskernose (W) ~ For Approval
My first image! Anyways, comments? 12:07, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights Crystalstar999 15:10, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the little shading outline lots, add highlights to the back, head and tail, add shading to the legs. 19:34, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

There is shading on the legs xD Nevermind! But you know what I mean XD 19:36, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Blur the highlights, redden, enlarge and center the ear pink. 22:07, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and title this Whiskernose (W) ~ For Approval...nvm, I'll do it XD 22:11, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, darken the ear-pink, and add a highlight to his face. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 00:54, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the neck and belly and thicken it. Fix the blurred ear lineart. --  Wildheart  In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 03:02, April 7, 2011 (UTC

With request from Willow, I am going to help with this image. ❁  YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ❁ 11:52, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 04:35, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading tons, add highlights, and enlarge earpink.  <font color="#A1C2E3">Mistfire <font color="#A1C2E3">Spring rainfalls  16:39, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading Night  shine  00:21, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I can work on it now. Thanks anyways Yatz. BTW Can somebody give me a color for the earpink? 12:09, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

You can use this chart to determine the earpink colour:  15:34, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

and blur the highlights. 00:02, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the neck and the belly and blur it. --  Wildheart  In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:52, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it tons. 20:00, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Could somebody help me on this? Because I'm confused. Some people said to darken the shading and then suddenly another person says to lighten it. 10:39, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

I wouldn't say lighten it, but if you followed this guide for shading the image would be a lot better =)  wildheart     spr ing rai n ♫   00:04, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

you can also blur the shading so that it flows from light to dark/ light to dark. Also redden the ear pink just a tad, if your not scrutinizing it, then it can disappear to the viewer. Amazing work Willowwhisper! (and great name!) <font face="French Script MT">Atelda 23:06, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Atelda! =) Could anybody help me fix the shading? I tried it, and it looked horrible. 11:49, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help with the shading. Night shine  22:30, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I tweaked the shading and ear pink. Night shine  22:38, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Nightshine! It looks awesome! 03:08, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Blur the shading a bit. 19:10, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten/blur the shading.  <font color="#A1C2E3">Mistfire <font color="#A1C2E3">Spring rainfalls  21:02, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Should I sill blur the shading more? 10:34, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Willow! 10:52, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, blur the shading a bit more, as well as the earpink. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 01:03, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry I haven't been able to work on this. My grandma died suddenly a few days ago, and now my dad is at the hopital because of a car accident. Anyways...comments? 12:09, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Why does everybody on this wiki have bad luck? wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 01:11, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good the only thing is you might want to make the earpink smaller and blur it more Wild  fire  01:46, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I keep blurring the shading, but it doesn't look any different! Can someone help me on it again? 11:20, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I'll blur it for you! 20:44, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

I re-uploaded it for you, but the changes might not be showing yet. 21:00, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my computer isn't working very well. Here it is with the shading blurred. 21:10, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be a tad bit brighter 00:21, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the ear pink needs to be a bit darker. If you lighten it then it will be even harder to see. Smudge the shading all around. Darken the shading. Night shine  00:47, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

You should also add a little shading to the tail, otherwise it looks great At  el  da  03:12, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

So...let me get this straight. Darken the shading,darken the earpink, and smudge the shading. Is that right? 11:03, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

LOOKS AWESOME! Apart from the fact that I can barely see the earpink. Darken that a tad, Willowwhisper. Darken the eye colour a tad, too. Only a tiny bit. It's a TINY bit more pale than before, and it had a hint of green to it and my first glance. Take a look at my first Charart(for PCA). It's Stormfur's prey hunter image. Mine sucks!- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 09:13, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Don't critisize your own charart XD And define the earpink. 22:48, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How does it look? 11:51, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton and blur the earpink. :3 20:27, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred it as much as I could. 08:43, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the ear and right side of the head. Do you need help blurring the shading? Because it is still sorely in need of blurring. }  wild    heart   ~    05:12, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

If there are highlights, they are blotchy and need to be blurred and brightened. The shading needs to be blurred too. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:orange;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  Want to eat orange ice cream?  21:28, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the shading needs to be really blurred. The earpink should be a little smaller and lighter. 20:45, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Argh! I need help again. Please? 11:36, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

I help you blur it if you add the shading first. Do you use GIMP or pixlr? 06:59, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you need blurring help, I can do it for you. 02:44, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I use pixlr, and I did add shading.... 08:32, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights looks sort of odd and blur the ear pink 23:14, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Go blur crazy with the highlights. They stick out a lot.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 03:28, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

I did blur crazy. It didn't work. -_- Help? 13:02, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to blur in photoshop for you? -- Cloud skye ♫  De  le  te   ♫ 17:14, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Did you change the opacity on your blur tool? I think if you put it to 100%, it should help blur it more. I use GIMP so I'm not sure if it's different for Photoshop. 22:17, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah as said before with the blurring and maybe to help stop it sticking out maybe lighten it. I'm not sure if that would work...Lark That Sings at Dawn 11:13, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes please Cloudskye! 14:00, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Willow, I'm working on your image now. I kinda had to lighten the shading too, in order for me to work with it. -- Cloud skye ♫  De  le  te   ♫ 16:30, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried my best to fix the shading, Willow, but I couldn't lighten it all the way without killing what you already had up there. If someone else wants to finish what I started, please do so. -- Cloud skye ♫  De  le  te   ♫ 16:46, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I use Adobe Photoshop. Is the head highlight supposed to cover the whole head? 'couse, right now, to me, it looks like he's wearing a pale mask. The haunch highlight is a bit too wide and messy-looking to me, too. And lighten the earpink a tad. I'll do all that(except earpink adjustement) on Adobe Photoshop, and put another version at the bottom of Whiskernose's section in with my next post, if you'd like.(Look, I'm an Apprentice of this Project, so I don't want to kill your good Charart altogether and mess it up by replacing the Charart at the top of this section).- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 00:03, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kittycat, don't upload a new image. Reupload your edited version of the image over the image ^up there^ and if they don't like it, they can revert the edit on the file. 207.81.88.82 22:58, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. Sorry, that was me. 23:02, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Why the hell did I think I could fix it?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 01:49, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shading needs to be blurred big time! 02:08, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

I can blur it if you'd like. I assume the changes aren't showing? It doesn't look any different from the last time you reuploaded it. 05:21, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm surprise this hasn't been declined yet, since I haven't worked on it a lot....anyways, thanks Kitty! @Widheart: Please help me blur it! When you're done, tell me, and I'll take over. 10:55, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it for you =) 03:20, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, it looks much better with the blurring you gave it, Wildheart.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 07:42, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

OMG! Thank you so much Wildheart! 11:55, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lol no problem. I'm glad you like it. @Kittycat - maybe it's just the tools you were using? 00:42, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! define the earpink. 00:18, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and define the ear pink. 03:21, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. BTW, what does define mean? 11:17, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define means to either make it less blurry, lighter, or darker, to make it more visible. It still could be more defined. 22:17, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Before you say anything more about blurring the highlights, anyone, take a look at Rainwhisker's warrior image: This Charart was approved, and his highlights are the same as Whiskernose's, which everyone is telling Willowwhisper, Whiskernose's artist, to blur. If an image with the same sticking-out highlights has been approved, shouldn't we stop saying 'blur the highlights'?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 03:26, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I just don't have the time to work on this anymore. If anyone wants to work on this image, feel free. 10:22, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over. 10:23, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the SHADING in the circled areas:

Blur it only a tad on the neck. And the reason the main back leg is circled is that you need to blur the highlight at the tip of the hind paw into the paw shading. They're unnaturaly, noticably seperated. Oh ya, and blur the edges of the face highlight a tad bit. Other than all the circled areas and the face highlight, this Charart is almost ready to go up, I think!- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 01:49, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Because of the uploading probelm, I don't know if the changes are showing. So here is how it looks right now: Image 10:38, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the shading just a little more. 20:08, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading the blur the highlights 03:10, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be able to work on this in three days. Sorry for the delay. 03:50, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The changes are showing! Yay! xD Comments? 04:47, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Kk, I am begging you all, PLEASE DON'T ADD ANY MORE COMMENTS DEMANDING BLURRING OF THE HIGHLIGHTS! It's getting stupid. I mean, in some people's perspective, the highlights are over-blurred. Just leave them, okay? Look at Rainwhisker's image I uploaded into this section to set an example! Are his highlights sticking out? YES! Um, anyway, Rainy, blur shading.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 05:38, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lol Kitty! Anyways, reuplaoded. 05:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Rainy! Blur the shading. And the earpink doesn't look like the right color. Could you fix it? <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  19:17, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the earpink color was Mossy who chose it. I asked her for advice, and she helped me fixed it instead. I'll ask her again I guess. BTW, how do I make the background transparent? 10:15, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading or lighten it. Mist: <font color="Teal">Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 18:57, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still looks dark in one area and light in the other, especially on the face. Maybe blur it more? 19:15, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

You were thinking exactly what I was thinking Squirrelflight! Anyways, I will see what I can do to make it look better. 10:37, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone know how to make the background transparent? 11:20, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

You take the wand tool (which looks like a wand), and click the outside of the cat. Then press CTRL and X. Hope this helps. -- Moon  leaf  01:05, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

It didn't work. =( Can someone help? 13:13, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I can help, if you want me to. 21:29, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks Mossy, for helping me blur it and make the background transparent! @Ivystripe - Thanks for the offer, but Mossy helped me. Comments? 00:38, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading, and darken the ear pink 06:35, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ugh! I am freaking out about the earpink. I don't know which color to use. Can somebody give me a specific color for the earpink if the color I am using right now is to dark? Thanks. BTW, comments? 09:41, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, Rainey. Why not try using the ear pink from his apprentice image, and see how that works out? <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 18:26, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I used Cloudskye's idea, but darkened the earpink a bit more. Comments? 13:51, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the chest shading so it looks more even, and then make the earpink a little smaller. This looks great! 14:59, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. When I smudged the chest, it looked a bit..weird. So I just blurred it more, and then resized the earpink. Comments? 10:46, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

This charart is looking fabulous! The earpink looks great, too. 04:50, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Anything else? Comments? 10:21, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

COMMENT. XD

Blur the earpink just a smidgey smudgy smoo. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  00:59, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How does it look? Comments? 13:19, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear-pink a tad redder. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 22:59, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can somebody help me with that? I am not good at darkening shading and I can't find the right color for the ear-pink. -_- 08:20, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

You want me to give it a try? <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 21:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes please! :3 00:17, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Well, I tried. I hope I didn't make it worse. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 19:04, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

That's okay Scarletwind. I'll just fix it up a bit when I get home from summer school.... 06:13, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh. Huge fail. Can someone help me again? There's one part of the highlight that looks so weird. I tried to fix it....but it looked worst. Help please? 13:37, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine. But the shading on the back is WAY to dark. Lighten it. 15:21, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

I always agree with Sandstormrocks, and redden the earpink a tad, blur the shading on the tail and front legs, then, CBA?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 01:29, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I made the earpink a teensy bit darker, and I did the other. I blurred as much as I could on pixlr for both. Anything else? 11:08, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shoulder highlight looks odd. <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  16:56, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit smaller and blur the shading because it looks blotchy. 02:21, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the earpink, but I don't know about the shading....Comments? 10:43, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the highlights bigger. 19:53, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, darken the shading. And the back and belly shading are different shades. They need to be the same. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:32, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

I agree as well. Looks good though Rainey! =D 02:58, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I thought that the old version looked better to work with than the new version, no offense Scarletwind. I made the earpink smaller, and now I'm trying to figure out a way to darken the shading without runing the whole image. 08:02, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Try to lighten the highlights, then. :D 18:40, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

redden the ear-pink. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 21:56, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think I darkened the shading too much, Rainey... If I messed up, I'm sorry. =( <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 02:26, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ya didn't. Thanks Cloudskye! I'll go blur it and fix the earpink.... 02:29, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a ton, and redden the earpink a tad. Good job.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 03:43, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so Rainey and I switched chararts :P '''Reuploaded. ''' 18:14, July 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * O this looks oh-may-zing!! Great job! Make the ear pink bigger ;) 13:42, July 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Also, blend out the shading with the pelt color so it's a smoother transition. 14:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reloaded  16:49, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit lighter. It looks to dark right now. Blur the shading. Good job! Better than what I did! =D 04:09, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reloaded  04:41, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The shading's a bit dark though. It's your choice whether you wanna lighten it or not I guess, since when Nightshine was here, her chararts always had dark shading, and she didn't HAVE to change it, but in my opinion it would look better a bit lighter. And make the earpink stand out a bit more. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:33, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reloaded ~ I lightened the shading a bit, and lightened the earpink a bit. 15:59, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still could be lightened. Great job, though! 17:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reloaded ~ Ok lightened a bit more. 17:49, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud With Star in Belly-For Approval
Comments? 21:28, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... This is supposed to be up in the "Images Pending Aproval" section, not the discussion area. <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 17:36, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I've moved this for you. I think you shold blur the shading down his back a more. Leopardclawxx 19:11, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little bit, it kinda extends below the ear a little bit. Make it a tad bit smaller 19:27, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Cloud (Star).elder.png. Cloud (Storm) and Cloud (Star) are not the same cats. 19:40, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, actually, they are. Think about it. The Erins wouldn't make a Tribe elder with a name so similar to another Tribe elders' name from a different book. I'm sure it was just a typo. - Ginger  tail <font color="#7E13D7" face="Segoe Script>The air is getting warmer! <font color="#7E13D7" face="Segoe Script> 20:04, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I just read the article in the discussion section XP - G  inger  tail <font color="#7E13D7" face="Segoe Script>The air is getting warmer! <font color="#7E13D7" face="Segoe Script> 20:08, April 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * Ah, one of the good ol' characters. This is however, wonderful. Make the ear pink a bit more...well, matching the gray pelt. Add shading to the chest and forehead. And, add shading around the haunch if you aren't going to add highlights. -- 02:20, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * The heading should also be changed, just so people don't get confused. XP I agree that Cloud with Star in Belly is a different cat from Cloud with Storm in Belly, and besides, if it wasn't this would be declined. Cloud with Storm in Belly already has an elder image. Darken the shading just slightly. ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:37, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded. 09:37, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is thick and blotchy, thin it out and blur it, and make the ear pink fit the ear, it's a bit messy. 17:38, April 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * Make the shading thinner, add some to the chest, legs, muzzle, and paws. -- 19:40, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Redo the entire image because it would be easier, and use the apprentice tutorials to help you. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">MINTSTARR  That peaceful Hawaiian breeze....  02:09, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ummm..guys, if you looked on the table, you would see that I already reserved this. Whats going on?
 * 19:47, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Lightningstar, you did have this reserved. But you reserved it on the same day this was put up. I say this be declined and you work on it, but its up to the senior warrirors. <span style="color:black;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:purple;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:black;">MINTSTARR  You can stand under my Umbrella!  22:07, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * 19:47, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Lightningstar, you did have this reserved. But you reserved it on the same day this was put up. I say this be declined and you work on it, but its up to the senior warrirors. <span style="color:black;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:purple;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:black;">MINTSTARR  You can stand under my Umbrella!  22:07, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wait... who reserved it first? Because it goes to them. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫   00:08, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well... I think i reserved t, did the charart, put it up, got off of my comp. and then whoever did the charart uploaded it and didnt see if anyome reserved it. 18:08, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I looked through the edit history and The Gost actually reserved it first. Sorry Lightningstar. Please work on this or it will be declined. Night shine  22:17, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:49, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading.  <font color="#A1C2E3">Mistfire <font color="#A1C2E3">Spring rainfalls  16:34, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 19:26, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ummmmmmmmmm, no, they did Cloud with STORM in belly ALT. ELDER. I did this.

20:15, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, since they are different cats, there should be one for each, since they were both mentioned as pale gray. 16:37, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Cloud With Storm in Belly was described as white. Try to make the earpink more triangular. 21:06, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink a tad more too. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 21:35, April 19, 2011 (UTC) URGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is doing this, me or them???????? LightningStar of ThunderClan (not logged in) XD

The Gost is doing this one, sorry. Night shine  00:08, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink also looks a tad unnatural. I mean like shade it in the direction of the ear and it goes a tad to far down. when you smudge or blur the earpink make sure you get the bottem, and smudge it to the tip of the ear. otherwise great job, love it! At el  da  01:34, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Two things

1. I put this up FIRST, and that is My image.

2.The Gost is doing Cloud with STORM in Belly Alt.E, not Cloud with Star in Belly

Lightningstar

It doesn't matter who put it up first, but you're right, you did reserve it. Sorry, The Gost, but this is Lightningstar's. Anyway, Lightningstar, please sign with four ~'s when you're on talk pages. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 02:30, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lightningstar, are you still working on this? If so, redden the earpink. 22:42, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:28, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumb it, and she was just described as a pale grey cat, not sure why you added those on the back. I can't see any shading on this. 23:13, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Make it a solid colored cat, she was never described as a tabby. 23:16, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

And perhaps blur the bottem of the earpink some more, and to bring out the shading, you should darken a few places just a little bit, so you don't over do it. At el  da  22:26, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

The things on the back seemed out of place... Sandstormrocks32 03:27, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights and brighten the earpink. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:orange;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  Want to eat orange ice cream?  00:14, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Its been a week. 21:46, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, and the person who was working on it first (even though they didn't reserve it first) was putting effort into it. No offense intended ^^; 20:31, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, i will put up the new version in about 3 days time (sooner). Lightningstar (not logged in xD)

Are you still working on this? Because it's been three days. }  wild    heart   ~    05:24, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

May I work on this?

/\ was me Maple♥  pool  I'm a star gazer~ 09:00, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 12 days since Lightningstar reuploaded it. So I believe so. If you do, make this accurate(like, why are those gray lumps there?) <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  20:52, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think they were supposed to be stripes, but she is a solid colored cat, so remove them, and add highlights. 22:06, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pelt solid, add highlights and shading, and lighten the earpink Wild  fire  22:13, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Been working on it for 5 days. XD 00:51, May 13, 2011 (UTC) If the shading needs work, i cant get it right (GIMP screwed up) Can someone do it?

What's up with the shading? and did somebody upload it on thier page? Sandstormrocks32 01:09, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you with the shading if you want me to. 01:51, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed. No, Ivystripe, don't help yet. I know GIMP, and I know it can't screw it up that bad. All you need to do is try again with a lighter coloured earpink, and fix the shading so it looks more like the redline on this tutorial. You can also find an earpink chart at the link I gave you. When you're blurring the shading, put the blur tool on 100% and go over it several times. If it's still not good enough, which it shouldn't be, then you can ask Ivystripe (or whomever you wish to ask) for help blurring. I hope I helped. 06:21, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thnks ivy and wildheart! Lightningstar (not logged in)

You're welcome. That's ok, but if you're still having trouble, just ask and I'll try to help :) 16:34, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. I just want your charart to be your own, not someone else's =) 00:12, May 15, 2011 (UTC

That is about as well as I can shade. Can someone help? D: 19:57, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help one sec... At el  da  20:25, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so all I did was smooth out the shading shading, you might also want to make the earpink more rounded on the angles. and lighter. At el  da  22:08, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I dethumbed it and do more hightlights 22:11, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs more blurring. Sandstormrocks: highlights are optional. Fill in those light pixels on the far ear. Much better, Lightningstar. 22:23, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and make it smaller. 22:03, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and more highlights 23:11, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the edges of the earpink, and blur it quite a lot. Darken the shading a tad. This is great.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 03:31, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the earpink more of the shape of the ear. Let the earpink curve with it. Also, what Sandstormrocks said: Fill in the blank white pixels on the ear furthest from us.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 03:34, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

I tried, but cant do it without re-doing the entire image. 21:05, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Then I guess you might have to redo the whole image. You could just erase the earpink and start over... 22:03, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. What Mistystar said is what I was thinking. This'll never get approved with that earpink.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 06:02, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's actually really easy, you won't have to redo the whole thing. Just color pick the color right behind the ear 9the light grey part), color over the ear pink, then use the right color for it and look at others to see how their ear pink looks. Maybe colorpicking off of an approved charart for the ear-pink might help. Let me see if I can find one to help you. 22:20, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

What about Cloud with Storm in Belly's charart? The earpink on that looks good :) 22:26, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that sounds good, just copy her image and colorpick it off :) I linked to it in the previous comment so it's right there. 21:12, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok.....sound good,but... how do you do that? Lightningstar(not signed in)

Click the image until it comes up in a blank window, then save it. From there, open it with your editing program and then you can colourpick it. I'm not sure what it's like in other programs, but for GIMP, the colourpicker looks like an eye dropper. 00:00, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks unnatural and the color is too pink 02:28, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it more natural; Here is an ear-pink chart for help :3

Up-load this in your editing window to get a natural shade of earpink, this is just some optional help =3 00:58, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I use Adobe Photoshop to edit my Chararts. Lightningstar, would you like me to make a third, new version of this Cloud With Star in Belly Charart and put it at the bottom of the section? I'll try to fix the earpink(not only the shape, but colour, too, using the pelt+earpink chart).- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 00:07, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think you could just do that, since this hasn't been re-uploaded for a long time. 22:56, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Here it is: Is the earpink lightened enough, or too much? And is it curled enough? I did my best.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 00:46, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...its okay, but the earpink should be reddened more, like Cloud with Storm in Belly's charart...And it could be a bit more curled/triangular, but its better than the current version's earpink. xD 22:52, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could be blurred some more. Kittycat, delete the above image, and then reupload it over the image at the top, so it doesn't confuse people =P 23:04, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Still work-in-progress, Sorry uys,about the abbcence,but school homwork has cut into my comp time. It will be uploaded, though, and im also going on vaca june 5 untill the following Sunday.

Lightningstar of ThunderClan

Shading needs to be blurred around the haunch. And a little around the tail. 02:19, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Try to make it seem smoother, not so angular. 02:20, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading by the right front leg could be blurred. 23:56, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

So, fix the earpink, blur the shading. 23:12, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

I like it so far, but you really need to blur the earpink. 75.134.29.67

This Should be declined from lack of work.

No, He/she was talking about earlier he/she has limited computer time.

I still think it should be declined from lack of work. If he/ she has limited computer time, he/she shouldn't reserve things like this.

I don't agree. Give her a chance.

this will be declined, then?

I guess.

Wait for an admin to say that this is declined before declining it yourself. This image hasn't even been given a 'Please work on this or it will be declined'. 19:48, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Wait! Don't decline this! Somebody impersonated me- I didn't say that! PLEASE don't decline this! Please... I didn't say that. Believe me... believe me! 19:53, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

This won't be declined. As for the impersonator, I found who it was and warned them. 19:56, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks so much! 19:58, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Still working on this.. sorry about the lack of work, but i have not gotten on the comp in a week, and im going on vaca tomorrow, so can someone add me to the vaca list? again, sorry for the lack of work. Lightningstar

The ear pink needs lightening, and it needs to curve with the ear. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:08, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, curve it with the ear as Leopardclaw said. Blur the ear pink and highlights. 03:24, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. :3 20:06, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Put the version with the new earpink at the top so people don't get confused. 00:03, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur back shading. Mist: <font color="Teal">Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 19:10, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

PLease work on this or it will be declined. 01:48, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back Dovey Newbie! 16:33, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I could take over :3 <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  20:10, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Why Was i removed from the list? Lightningstar

YA you can take over. Rename this Cloud.elder.png. 18:53, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lightningstar: You were removed because you were probably inactive. And sign with 4 ~'s. <font color="#33ccff">Snowdazzle <font color="Cyan" style="background:white;"> ROAD TRIPPP!! 19:26, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over this now, 'cause Shy Fawn was approvaled X3 <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  01:04, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm on my mom's computer, which sadly does not have GIMP. I did the best I could with Pixlr, which I'm sad to say is only good with Colour Replace and Layers. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  01:18, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

B-B-But I HAVE been working on this. I think someone has removed my posts, because I have been active EVERY DAY. Dont you think its wrong to rip someones FIRST charart away from them?Lightningstar

I'm sorry Lightningstar, but you HAVEN'T been active everyday. You can go to your user contributions and see that. As far as I know, nothing can be deleted from there, so that's proof that you were inactive for a while. Even if you came on everyday, you didn't DO anything. And also, please sign with four ~s. And as for the charart, the earpink's blurred now, so that's good, but it's still really hot pink. I'd suggest just redoing it. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:23, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the ear pink is really bright. You should try making it more like the shape of the ear itself... like, round the edges more ;) But it looks good!! 00:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, you could make the ear so it didn't look like a triangle as much, but this charart's great. 13:56, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, i will have it up tomorow, GIMP crashed again, and can someone add me back on the list? 16:13, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so whose charart is this now? 13:40, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so I did the color-pick, thats the best i could do with the earpink, blurred and all. If it looks bad, can someone help? 14:06, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed it. Mistfire is doing this now, actually. Lightningstar took too long to do this, so they were removed from the list and I believe Mistfire took over. Sorry Lightningstar, but you simply cannot come and work on this at your leisure, if everyone did that, almost no articles would have charart. -- 14:51, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

To me, that's a good color, but the shape is still not exactly fit for the ear and it needs to be blurred more. There are also some white pixels along both ears. The rest looks really good!! Do you want me to help with the earpink? 19:16, June 27, 2011 (UTC)


 * starts crying* But I have worked on it, i just didnt get it up because the site wouldnt let me log in, and my mom told me to get off of the computer. ;-( 14:23, June 28, 2011 (UTC) = saddened

P.S. If im not working on this, can I do a charart for Pepper?

Sorry Lightningstar, and, not to sound rude, but no. You can't do a describsion for Peper, as he was only described as a tom. 08:00, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, is there any other character that needs art? Im really bored, as Clouds Charart was the only thing i was on the comp for, and now I have nothing to do. ;( 15:17, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Lightningstar, but kits cannot do chararts until they move up to be apprentices. Sorry :\ Anyways, back to the art, just curve the earpink and make it a bit triangular. Maybe just re-do the whole image, but it's your choice, Mistfire :) 01:54, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know you can make great images, so try redoing it. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:57, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 03:10, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still looks weird. Look at an approved image of an elder, how the earpink looks, and copy it. It's hard to explain exactly how to fix it, know what I mean? I think it helps to have a visual aide. 03:24, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, fix the far ear, it was lots of plain white pixils on it. 14:38, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this Mistfire? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the earpink; it should be more triangular. 17:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Marshstar (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Wild fire  20:46, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Darken the shading a bit, make the ear pink fill the ear, define the scar on the haunch. Darken the nose colour as well. Night shine  20:48, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and the haunch on the left (my left.). Looks good! :) 21:01, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  21:11, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for taking my advice oh and make the scars on the right front paw longer and possibly a scar on the tail Sandstormrocks32 21:40, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add a touch of shading by the edges of the inner ear to make it look a little less flat, sharpen the scar on his flank, darken the shading under the chin and add shading the under part of the tail. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 01:24, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

You don't necessarily need to add shading on the earpink, but smudge the pelt colour into it with the smallest brush possible. He doesn't have a scar on his tail, so you don't need to add one. Blur the shading and darken it a bit. 03:46, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch closest to us. Apart from that, it looks pretty good!- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 07:12, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  19:38, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear oink then I belive it should be ready 22:13, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  22:35, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading :) 20:07, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 22:01, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  23:29, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the bottom of the scarred haunch still needs a tad more blurring.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 01:07, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

And the shading on the chest. 01:16, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  23:43, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is gray... 00:42, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be gray. Blur the haunch shading and smudge the pelt colour into the ear. 01:26, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. The haunch scar too. <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  20:39, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the eyes need some shading as well. 00:28, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

blur the tail shading. 00:32, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Wild  fire  01:13, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the face highlight.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 07:06, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  01:13, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

On the hind leg the shading looks odd, so smudge or blur that just a little. Also you could darken the scar on the hind leg. Darken the eye color and this will be perfect. Good job At  el  da  02:15, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the bottom of the un-scarred front leg. The haunch highlight could do with some blurring/smudging, too. This is cool. I think it should get approved in not too long.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 09:23, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt colour into the ear, and add some depth in the eye by darkening the bottom pixels. 00:22, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink 12:54, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the earpink from the deputy charart so I'm going to leave that Wild  fire  15:07, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, especially on the haunch. 19:59, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the middle of the tail, the scarred front leg, and scarred haunch. Those three problems mess it up quite a bit, especially haunch light. Go pretty much blur crazy there. This looks good, apart from my suggestions.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 23:51, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight, and smudge the earpink into the ear a bit. 22:44, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  22:34, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the whole thing, or darken the highlights and shading. 14:22, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 22:18, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  23:11, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful, I see nothing wrong. 01:19, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. 02:24, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the tail a little 03:27, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you could shade the area where his haunches meet his left leg and his chest between his legs, since those areas are likely shadowed by his legs. :) Fawngaze 23:33, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  15:17, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and the shading on his front left leg (his left :3). 18:34, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bit on the haunch. 82.42.59.123 19:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC) (Dovewing145 not signed in)

Blur the shading. Sorry, I know it was said, but I can't help it! :D 19:34, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the scars. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  22:11, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. 06:56, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

The red is where you need to blur where the highlights meet the base pelt color/shading. The green is where you need to darken/add shading. 17:53, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights on the face 00:17, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. His left hanuch shading really needs to be blurred. Oher than that I like this :3 20:54, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 15:17, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes 67.237.233.17 02:23, June 26, 2011 (UTC) (Wildfire not logged in)

Reuploaded Sorry I haven't been on Wild  fire  20:33, June 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * points at picture* Errrrrmm.... Blurr the haunch aaaannd..Tats all I got xP --

Smudge the ear pink some more. 18:50, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add more shading. <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  16:58, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a ton. 02:24, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone with Gimp please blur the haunch Wild  fire  00:05, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred it. Add shading and a pixel of white for shine to the eyes. -- 00:40, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blacken the eye lineart and blur the highlight on the tail.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 09:24, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:05, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Especially the shading on the haunch. 18:26, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken shading on the eye. 19:38, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  23:02, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Use the apprentice tutorials to see how leaders are supposed to be shaded. If you have added shading, darken it. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  17:58, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire  23:01, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more. 16:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Wild fire  22:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Nobody reserved it so I thought I could do it. But I messed up the torn ear. Sandstormrocks32 16:53, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm, not bad, needs some work;


 * 1) one make him more golden colored, like his aperentice image is, this is more a horrid yellow-green


 * 1) number two

You might want to copy the red line that was done for his image that was up before this one;

copy the colors for it too


 * 1) three

Darken and blue the earpink some more and make it smaller. Maple♥ pool  I'm a star gazer~ 18:05, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks but it might take a while becuase I'm trying to replicate it. So it might take a while but i am working on it. Sandstormrocks32 18:31, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Almost done... 21:30, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:01, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Darken the shading, and lighten the earpink. Blur the stripes as well. 22:18, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

(and smudge if you want) Wild  fire  22:27, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blured the striped as I could 22:38, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Rename this Tigerheart.warrior.alt. 22:40, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Blur the stripes more evenly and either add more or make the current ones thicker. Desaturate the earpink. 23:01, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded I did as much as possible but it was really hard to make the stripes thicker and blur the stripes but I did my very best 23:09, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded i made the stripes bigger and i changed the ear pink. I hope the changes show! 02:01, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Run over the stripes with the smudge tool to give them a sort of "point". Darken the belly/legs. 20:00, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Make the earpink smaller. 22:00, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded When I reupoad my computer says I have to rename it and I can't do anything about it so I keep having to change the name in someway. 22:47, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Well, you can still upload it onto the same image and keep the same name on the wiki file, even if you rename the file on your computer. 22:50, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded The shading was driving me crazy! But i still have to change the name. I don't know what to do. And it's when I'm inserting the picture. 23:46, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">CBA?! 75.72.59.54 02:08, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">The stripes look kinda pasty and the highlights don't go through them. It's like the stripe is over the highlight. Stretch the highlight down the tail rather than leaving it on the tip and darken the shading. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 04:28, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">MUCH better, blur the pink a tad, do what Scarlet said, and whoever said CBA, that is for the leads to do, not so random person, to do. Maple♥ pool  I'm a star gazer~ 08:16, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">okay 1.go over highlights again and 2.to Reupload the charart you click on it then you click on the little box thing in the bottom right corner then you scroll past the two pictures of your cat and click on 'Upload a new version of this file' and find it on your computer Wild  fire  11:45, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">The stripes need highlights/shading too. 21:53, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded @Wildfire I clicked modify and I had to do the same thing 22:58, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Its too light. Are you sure you copied the colors from the apprentice alt? 23:40, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">I got it from the red line one but I'll darken it right now

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded Sorry ^ that ^ was me. I darken the whole thing now 00:10, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Now the stripes don't have shading. 00:14, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded I put some more hightlights and shading 00:19, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Blur the highlights some more, darken the shading a tad, and blur the stripes. 01:46, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Blur the stripes and the shoulder and face highlight. This looks great, Sandstormrocks.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 05:51, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Could someone blur it on GIMP for me please? (Sandstormrocks32 not signed in)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">I would blur it for you, but I don't have GIMP. 20:51, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">I can help you. Imma talk to you on our userpages. 22:25, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded I blured as much as i could but could somebody blur on GIMP please? But I did darken just a little bit. 22:48, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Ok reuploaded for you. I blurred the stripes, some of the shading, got rid of some misplaced pixils, and erased the waste around the erased part of the ear. Hope I helped :) 23:00, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Darken the highlights, darken the shading (I can't really see any) darken the stripes a bit and define them. Night shine  23:18, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Make the ear pink smaller. 00:33, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Looks much better with the highlights and stripes blurred. Blur the shading on the bottom of the tail, and make the earpink a tad smaller, as Squirrelflame advised. Blur shading on the front paw closest to us. This is awesome! :)- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 01:54, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">OMG! It looks awesome! Darken the shading. 11:24, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded I'm having the worst time ever with reuploading! :( 20:52, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">The highlights are still too bright. It makes him look shiny. Also, darken the shading a bit more. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:54, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reoploaded I fixed the reuploading problem 23:33, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Blur the stripes and make the shoulder highlight more oval-shaped. 01:59, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded  02:34, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Blur and darken the highlights. 20:20, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded Never mind I'm still having trouble with reuploading 22:34, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">From above. What do you mean you clicked modify? Wild fire  18:12, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Rename this 'Tigerheart.warrior.alt' 19:19, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">@Rainlegs Sandstorm is having a problem w/ reuploading I'm trying to help. you can join in on her talk page if you have any suggistions. Wild fire  21:24, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded I fixed all the misplaced colors and stuff. @ Wildfire thanks for the help with reuploading the problem is now fixed 00:40, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Rename this Tigerheart.warrior Maple♥  pool  I'm a star gazer~ 03:45, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Correction, name this Tigerheart.warrior.alt, As Rainlegs stated before =) 20:32, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">The highlights are too light; darken them a bit, and the highlights look kind of greenish on the face... 22:40, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt">Reuploaded I don't know how to rename it. Is it possible for somebody else to change the name? Oh and when I press backspace it makes me go back to the previous page 23:12, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Upload the same file, then name it "Tigerheart.warrior.alt.png". Then replace the old image with the new image. That's how you rename it. 00:45, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make sure to put the "delete" tag on it saying it's a duplicate and an admin will get rid of it. 01:35, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of blotchy. 20:28, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to change the name but I dont think it's wroking too well 22:41, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pale, center it, and blur it. Add shading. Blur the stripes. The highlights are too bright and need to be blurred. And there is blurred lineart on the right foreleg. <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  02:01, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the tip Mintstarr. I also fixed the other misplaced pixils 23:19, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Try to blur where the highlights meet the actual pelt color and/or darken them. :) 02:51, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blured as much as I could and i darkened the highlights 14:34, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job!! You might just want to blur the earpink a bit more, and darken the legs that aren't in front. At el  da  00:52, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did that and I don't think the way Wildfire told me how to do it isn't woking too well... It keeps reuploading the same picture. Is anybody having the same problem? 01:42, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

I am, too. Just upload it twice everytime you need to reupload it, and tell people that the correct image is the one under the 'current' one on the file page. 02:43, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't understand like, half of that but I'll try to do that next time. 03:13, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are way too light, they look kind of greenish. 00:37, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did what Rainlegs said to do, and It worked but it's not showing and I reuploaded it like 3 time and it didn't work. But it is under the "current" one on the file page. 00:57, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing. The colors don't match the apprentice pic anymore. Also darken the shading, and sharpen the stripes around the shoulder/neck area. And MAYBE get rid of the highlights, as it still makes him likke a bit too shiny, but that's up to you. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:50, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

And the earpink is kind of blotchy, fix that. 22:17, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded To dark? I don't know what I was doing... So comments? 22:54, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still blotchy; And the highlights are still too light and too small. 23:00, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I sort of got rid of the hightlights becuase they were making him look grennish. And I ended up re-doing the ear pink and. 00:11, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

The changes don't seem to be showing... 00:18, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, he is brown make him golden Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 08:25, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does he look better now? 21:15, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful! Blur the tabby markings, please. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Sk ye  Me ow 21:25, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks really blotchy, though. Define and redden and blur it. 23:36, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's under the current one on the file page. Just to let you know...

Hmm...the shading in the back needs to be blurred a bit more...or if there are highlights right next to the shading...the different shades/highlights should blend together a bit better...I know that sounds sort of confusing...but just try blurring the back shading. Wow I'm starting to ramble ;P Otherwise...this is pretty good. :)

Yeah, blur the highlights and shading. 21:58, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I can't really blur anymore than this... 00:12, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

You might want to have more then four little spots of highlights. Where's your light source coming from? 21:04, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well the light source is between the tip of the tail and the ear.Somewhere between there or in tha general area... 23:18, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. A lot. And make them bigger. And darker. xD 23:19, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. It fills up the ear too much. <font color="#33ccff">Snowdazzle <font color="Cyan" style="background:white;"> ROAD TRIPPP!! 20:20, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. The ear pnk is too angular at the top corner. 02:27, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, it's looking much better from when it started! The earpink's a bit too red right now though. Lighten it a bit, Also take the eye color from his apprentice image. This is looking great! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:05, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks too big. And blur it too. This is a lot better! 16:26, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Why does ear pink have to be so hard... 17:41, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink and blur the shading. 20:25, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad, and make the earpink more triangular, along with lightening it, making it more pink and less red. Maybe add a highlight to the ears? They look too dark to me. This is great.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 05:40, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the tip, Kittycat 14:50, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

I love this character art! I suggest that you maybe lighten the part of the tail that faces upwards and maybe the tip of the un-torn ear? It seems as though the lighting is coming from above in some parts so.... Oh! And maybe you could darken the back paw, the one that is less visible and isn't really "facing" us. Since it is under Tigerheart's body or on the otherside it should probably be just slightly darker! Fawngaze 23:28, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Very odd request but I think I did what you wanted 15:28, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh Sandy, I don't wanna sound mean, but this whole thing, not right. The highlights need to be more circular, and only on the face and haunch. The shoulder highlight needs to be ovaly, while the tail tip is obvious. Shade the back, legs, tail, mid-back to underbelly, and stomach to chin. Smudge and blur the stripes, and desaturate the earpink. <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  19:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Though I did do the shading I just darkened it and put the highlights differently. I don't really know what ^that^ means so I did nothing to the ear pink... I'm not the best in engilsh class 02:45, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot. Reuploaded 

I think this is great and I really like it. CBA? . Darkhallows   Enter the cave?

I dont think that was actually Darkhallows, just someone using her siggie, but either way, darken the neck and mid section shading. 04:00, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded You do know that it's the second one on the file page, right? 14:58, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

There are some speckledy bits above the torn ear - erase them. Also, make the earpink pinker. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 15:42, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are those things gone? 16:26, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Some markings look more blurred than other markings. Blur them all again? 19:37, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the markings, earpink, and shading. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  22:27, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have blured 14:27, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it more, and make the earpink smaller. 16:43, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more neck shading. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  22:14, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more triangular. 00:34, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Curse you ear pink! 16:25, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading? This seems way too dark. If I'm wrong, then sorry. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 18:21, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's your comment 17:14, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading more? 17:29, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can't blur it anymore then this... 15:45, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, this is great! I see nothing wrong with it. Bluestar11796 01:41, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. This is beatiful! CBA? <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 10:40, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the interruption, but the tail highlights don't match with the body highlights... 19:04, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded done. I think I did what you wanted 21:48, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and thin out the shading. <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  17:00, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:32, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened a little and the haunch highlight needs to be a little more.. circular? x3 02:26, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Circularerised? Whatever, done. 15:13, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add a small highlight to the tip of the tail, or just brighten it. 04:01, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I brightened it 14:46, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading by the jaw, stretch the shading up to the tip of the tail, and move the highlight on the face onto the muzzle. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 19:27, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tryed my best with the highlights 00:14, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thin the shading more. It's touching the highlights too much. And blur the stripes. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:51, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the bottom of his arm closest to us. 14:42, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Man I can't do much more to this! Arg! But sorry I was away; I was camping 03:05, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the highlights are still too bright. You seem to be having problems with them. Do you need any help? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded No. But I think I got it now 16:30, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks blotchy, blur it more. 16:49, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt. L) ~ For Approval
It was declined due to lack of work, so I thought I'd give it a try. XXXSpecklestreamXXX 06:46, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks lovely! ^^ Blur the shading/highlights a bit more and maybe smudge or blue where the earpink meets the fur.

^ That was me, sorry, forgot to sign. XP ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:17, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Blur and darken the shading more. :D 11:04, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, and blur and smudge the earpink. 20:50, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I darkened the whole thing and the shading and blurred the ear-pink. 21:30, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice! Redden the nosepink, and smudge the earpink more. 21:36, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I'm sorry, personal business has kept me away from PCA. Make him a little more reddish, like mine.  <font color="#A1C2E3">Mistfire <font color="#A1C2E3">Spring rainfalls  22:12, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing again and then more hightlights 23:36, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

The bottom of the tail could be a LITTLE bit darkened, otherwise it is AWESOME! *Ivyheart* 17:28, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I darkened it, blurred the ear-pink, reddened the nose and darkened the shading on the tail. 20:15, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Slightly pinken the earpink. Leopard claw Eyes watching in the Dark…  13:11, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Fill the ear completely with earpink and then smudge the pelt colour into it. Darken/blur the shading and fill in the white pixels in the bottom of the eyes. You also need to erase the smudged lineart outside the bottom of the haunch. 00:26, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton all the way down the right side. Fill in all the white pixels on the ears, mainly on the left ear. Also, blur the shading and highlights together on the right side of the chest. Blur tail shading a tad at the edge all the way along. Same for the front legs. Give the face a small highlight and blur it when you put the light on.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 04:41, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading, add tail shading, intensify the highlights. 06:57, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Like they said ^ blur/smudge the shading, and I would darken the bottem of the tail a bit more. Nice job! At el  da  22:51, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading above the forelegs. Other than that, he looks very handsome!

- ♫Millie♫ <font color="Purple">It’s getting cold outside... 22:57, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this "Pinestar.leader.alt.". 05:19, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I intensified and blurred the shading and highlights, and smudged the ear-pink. How do I rename it? 20:30, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Save this file under the correct file name, then place the "delete" tag on the duplicate image and an admin will remove it for you. 01:37, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Thanks :) 15:37, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlighting. Nice job! 20:31, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Either darken all the shading so it matches the intensity of the shading on the back/tail, or lighten those bits. Blur all the shading/highlights as well. 23:28, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Less hightlights on the chest area and redden the ear pink. Then darken the shading a little bit. 00:13, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest and back shading, too. 23:38, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 08:43, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the shading on the chest a little more. This looks amazing! At el  da  23:06, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the back shading more. =) 22:01, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

The right ear pink looks too big. There's a lot of stray lineart, and some of the shading looks blotchy. 02:29, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly, legs and haunch. 19:00, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink just a tad and lighten the nose color. Light the shading a lot 03:30, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's this area near the place where the haunch starts that just looks kind of... weird. Can you fix it? 19:40, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the backs of the front legs. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  22:32, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights. This is really good! 16:44, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is the tawny alternate, correct? If this is, shouldn't it be more like the image I have above? (See Oakheart's Alt Warrior) ...This seems...too orange. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 18:23, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Pinestar.leader.alt. 19:08, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is sort of orangeish. Other than that more highlights and lighten the shading on the right side more 17:41, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose pink a bit? 17:31, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Specklestream? <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:25, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I completely changed the colour (but it isn't showing yet). 12:43, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is too ginger. Make it more brown. <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  14:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading along its back and on its tail. It looks good ;) 00:05, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 13:18, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill all of the ear where it indicates. Add shading to the eyes. All the shading and highlights need to be blurred, when I look closely it is not a smooth transition. 01:34, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

He looks lovely! But...um...nosepink(whatever they call it: nose colour or something)could be a bit brighter.

Make the nose color a darker version of the pelt - solid colored cats have a nose color similar to their fur color unless the fur around it is white, ginger, or cream. -- 00:31, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like it has been reuploaded. If so, make it a little more ginger. Good job! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:54, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps expand the shading on the back to the side of the face and bottom of the haunch, to smooth it out. It looks great :) 19:35, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights and lighten the earpink, then make it fill up the whole ear. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 20:10, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

This look AMAZING! It does need to be made a bit more ginger though. This is brown, not tawny. I was told below on my charart to use Birchfall's alt image for a good reference on tawny, so maybe you could look at that for reference. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the earpink fill up the whole ear? :3 16:42, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pine (K) - For Approval


Comments? 20:31, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section XD Blur the shading. 20:46, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a little as well. 22:33, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink 22:39, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eye color too. At el  da  01:44, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is a bit lumpy and uneven in some places. Blur it out. Darken the shading a lot, too. And I'm having a hard time seeing the ear pink. 08:04, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Very good, but I agree, the ear could be darker- more visible to see. Blur the highlights on the front right leg a bit. *Ivyheart* 17:05, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make him more pale, please. 01:59, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eye color. Are you still working on this? 17:25, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Its been four days, wait awhile. Maple♥ pool  I'm a star gazer~ 08:33, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the shading. Leopard claw Eyes watching in the Dark…  13:09, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back seems a bit blotchy on the back and legs, blur them please =) 01:10, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Don't decline this. Dapplecloud's internet is down, so it might be a few more days until she can work on this. 00:32, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

You should blur the shading a little more on his back. It stands out too much. 22:00, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:30, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading doesn't look consistent. Look at this on how to shade kits: This should help you immesnley, it really helped me :) 15:21, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Ivystripe. 05:49, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eye color and lighten the highlights a little bit. 14:27, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

No prob. Define the shading on the legs. 71.72.157.130 21:51, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more, there are still a few spots where the shading falters. Also you might want to redden the earpink. Nice job! At el  da  01:39, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

What color is the eyes supposed to be? And the hightlights and the shading looks sort of blotchy. 00:16, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fairly blotchy, blur it, and you can't really see the ear pink too well, so make it pink. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 05:39, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:34, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the back more 04:38, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Remember that because of the uploading problems, the image will be the one that is under the most recently uploaded one. Make the earpink a bit redder, but great work! 22:15, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ok, thanks. 04:27, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste around his left foor, we see it as the right. So erase that. 01:21, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I meant FOOT. 01:25, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Except of course, the waste around the foot. 02:32, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight a ton. Same with the streak of light down his ---> front leg. Blur the shading on his --> side. Also, blur highlight a tad on his < front leg. And, obviously, erase the waste beside his visible back paw. Blur highlight on it, too.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 10:03, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really blotchy. And you need to lighten the nose color. 03:31, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:09, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  22:40, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome work! Redden the earpink a bit, 16:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly blur the chest highlight. -- Moon  leaf  01:17, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Rename this Pine.kit.png. 19:09, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a little more. It looks really good! 15:04, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights on the chest and face 15:10, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, but blur it as well.

I think that was me ^^ I thought my siggie showed up when I posted it, But maybe I just forgot to sign ;D 15:48, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

The highlight on the chest it blotchy 01:59, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink just a tad bit more 19:22, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:38, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

The torso of the pelt looks...smudgy? Like where his chest it is. Blend it out more. 03:37, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

The chest looks like a square. Make it look more natural. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  16:07, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. Looks good :3 22:27, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still looks blotchy Blur it to smooth it out. And make the earpink stand out more. Good job! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:59, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Other than that, awesome work! 16:38, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Harley (Alt. R) - For Approval
At el  da  21:51, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

He was actually described as gray-black so that would be just dark gray. Night shine  22:15, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

This would be declined then, wouldn't it? 05:26, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ I don't think so, because he's originally brown and grey. I just messed up on the coloring XD. At el  da  16:29, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think Nightshine meant that it just had to be a solid dark gray. No patches or anything. 18:26, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, mkay. :3 18:43, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so I'm somewhat confused. Is he grey and black or just solid grey? At el  da  22:48, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Solid dark gray. 23:09, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ At  el  da  00:20, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could be more consistent; there's highlighting on the bottom/chest area as well as the back, so where's the light source? xD 00:24, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the back a bit *Canyonsong* *Warrior Of Fireclan*  02:29, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Figure out your light source and change the shading; right now it doesn't really make sense. There's no visible light source. Blur all the shading as mentioned above, and make your earpink a bit smaller. 207.81.88.82 03:15, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me ^^ I keep on getting signed out. 03:31, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ not sure if it's showing up or not... btw, I smudged and blurred it as much as I could on pixlr without messing it up. At el  da  04:05, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading doesn't make any sense, where's your light source? 18:27, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok sorry uploaded the wrong one. The light source is now right in front. At el  da  21:26, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Harley.rogue.alt.png 17:36, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and maybe see Nightshine's tutorial? It shows how to do the shading/highlights and light source... 21:45, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ At  el  da

Blur the highlights. Great job! 22:12, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ I'm being really indecisive with the shading, experimenting. At el  da  16:47, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading and lighten the whole image a tad. It looks black now, he's supposed to be gray-black. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:10, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Ok I lightened the image, and blurred it as much as pixlr would let me. <span style="color:Lime;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:green;">❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:01, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look kind of unnatural. Make them more oval-shaped, maybe? xP 20:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest having a light source from behind, It doesn't look natural to have little spots of highlights. 20:59, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Sorry, internet has been down, but so I did this one on GIMP but I also did one with the light source behind. So...does this shading look good or should I put up the one with the light souce behind? <span style="color:Lime;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:green;">❀ Atelda ❀ talk 20:00, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more reddish, the current color is hard to see. <font color="#C3C6C7" face="Segoe Script">~ <font color="#AFCAF0" face="Segoe Print">Mis <font color="#87D5ED" face="Segoe Print">teh <font color="#C3C6C7">~ <font color="#87DEDA" face="Segoe Script">Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  22:45, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good, but the highlights are too light, the earpink should be reddened, and the shading should be blurred. The eyes should also be darkened. Nice work, though! 16:24, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think the highlights are the right shade, but blur them a ton, along with the shading, darken the eyes, smudge earpink, maybe add a tiny bit of highlight on his <- ear, and there's a white pixel on his nose. Wait, is that white pixel supposed to be there? I dunno. Good job.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 09:54, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bottom part of the tail. 20:51, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is faded, it needs to be block pink and then blurred. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 12:39, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Harley.rogue.alt.png. 19:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok. 23:38, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 17:34, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The eye looks kind of odd to me. It's kinda... i don't know... boxy? :P Or it could be just me :P 13:10, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok, done! 22:41, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading 21:52, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Comments? 17:41, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a bit on the bottom part? 18:59, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Of course! 19:05, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it just a little. 19:59, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ok I lightened it, and I've blurred it without trying to blur the lineart. 03:16, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch the shading up the tail to where the hind legs and the tail touch and darken the ear-pink a tad. This is looking good. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 21:52, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I switched with Atelda, so I'm taking over Harley now. I don't know if it looks any difference, but I darkened the ear-pink a bit. @Scarletwind - What do you mean by stretching the shading up to the tail? I'm a bit confused. 03:19, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Rainwillow! Blur the shading a bit though. 06:53, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @ Willow: You should have said it looked good to Atelda. She was the one who originally had this reserved. xD Anyways, comments? 07:04, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the muzzle ;) 14:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The darkest shading looks too dark, lighten it a tad. Make it a much smoother transition between light and dark, currently it's very harsh. 14:45, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. Anyways, does it look better? 02:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

There appears to be a 'stripe' inbetween the shading and highlights. Smooth that area out. 02:59, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't know what you meant by the stripe, so I just blurred the shading and highlights. Anything else? 03:03, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Commenting on my use-to-be-mine charart xD. Blur the earpink a bit, the hindleg shading looks a bit odd. There is a darker spot on it. The bottem of that same hindleg looks a bit lighter too. Make the eye color more green too. (glad I switched this to you) Nice job though, better than me! 04:08, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Now? 06:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little more triangular. Looks almost ready! :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I made the earpink a bit triangular. Comments? 13:33, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! darken the nose color. 16:34, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Anything else? 03:05, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Not for me, awesome job on my fail! 03:09, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The nose still looks a bit funny. I think it's just cause the shading's dark over there. Maybe lighten it a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 03:24, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''How does it look? 04:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfur (PH) ~For Approval
Here he is! A while ago, I put this same thing up, except with the old prey hunter blank, and it was declined because the new prey hunter blanks were being worked on. So, comments?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 08:49, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreask looks a bit....strange. Blur it more, and also blur the shading. 10:19, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Good job with the eye! And the mud is as red as the ear pink. Make dark brownish. More highlights on the tail 14:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Make the ear pink fill the whole part of where the ear indicates. Make the mudstreaks a little less uniform and make them go kinda crazy on him, so it looks more natural. 14:21, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the belly and bottom of the tail. Also, Darken and smudge the mud-streaks to make them look a little more natural, Like Ivystripe stated before. 16:16, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks are red! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 17:08, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Stormfur.ph.png. 20:11, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and darken the shading. <font color="#33ccff">Snowdazzle <font color="Cyan" style="background:white;"> ROAD TRIPPP!! 22:40, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The mud streaks could use some work. You should make them a more brown-ish color, as opposed to orange-red. And you should tryand blend them into the fur-color more too. Shade under his head and the ear farthest from us. Fawngaze 22:00, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changed mud colour, blurred shading, darkened shading, added more highlights onto the tail, added shading in the places Fawngaze requested.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 01:15, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

The mud still seems a bit red, try to make it a bit more of a pasty brown and darken the shading a tad more. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:21, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the brown. — PercyJackson101  &#124; Talk 14:55, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the mud that ran over the lineart on the back :] 19:57, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Try making the mud streaks browner. And the earpink is a little too pink. But good job. Shadewing  So unlucky we are... 00:18, June 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Reuploaded. '''Yes, I made a completely new one. Oh yes, and Sandstormrocks32, for the eye, while I was making the first one, I stole a copy of Brook's new prey hunter image, and uploaded it into the art program I use(Adobe Photoshop) as well as my Stormfur one, and zoomed into the eye on both Chararts, and copied the eye style from Brook. I remembered how to do the eye for the second image.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 04:25, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the mud color just a bit, change the eye color, it looks red. Add shading on the head and legs. Nice job! 22:26, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mudstreak parts I circled more narrower and longer. They look like big blobs. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:24, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Smudged most of the mud, and added some streaks to his face.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 09:52, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Better, but some of the mud is still in big blobs. Good job, though. Shadey  Iro Ni! 13:32, June 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

To much mud and redden the ear pink 19:03, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink color is fine; just smudge it. :3 02:34, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''You mean smudge the earpink so it looks like a gray tuft of fur is going up into the ear? (see top of section for my reuploaded ear). And I think the mud is fine.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 03:08, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud smaller and sharpen or do something with some of the mud, it can kind of blend into the pelt. Also put/ add shading on the head, and legs (make the legs darker, head lighter) 19:57, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:39, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the mud on his face. -- 09:03, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Did you get all the colors from his cave-guard image? The fur looks kind of too light, but good job! 17:59, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid it.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 09:53, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, Kitty! Can you darken the mud please? <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 02:07, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Also, add some mud streaks along the back and legs. 22:30, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

And redden zee (the) earpink. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple and darken a blur the mud. also, is there any shading on the mud? If not, add some. It looks kind of funny since the charart has shading, but the mud doesn't seem to. Good job though! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The Mud looks strange, and darken the shading, fix the earpink. Nice work! 16:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Splash (PH) ~ For Approval
Still awful at mud. Oh well. I realise the earpink is awful, please don't comment as I am going to fix it. So, Comments? Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 17:08, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the mud a bit, brighten the ear-pink, and darken the shading on the head. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 17:11, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also darken the eyes. 20:08, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Splash.ph.png 20:09, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mudstreaks more. It looks great! =D 10:15, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mud fixed (I think XD) Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 15:54, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill up the whole ear. Great job! ^^ <font color="#33ccff">Snowdazzle <font color="Cyan" style="background:white;"> ROAD TRIPPP!! 17:42, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and more highlights on the stomach 18:51, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ears fixed (Hopefully) Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 19:00, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Better, add a spot of shading in the ear and add a white pixel in the eye, they look a bit too concentrated. Darken the shading under the chin and on the chest. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 19:22, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm.. Darken the ear pink aaaaand...smudge the mud 8] --

Reuploaded Eyes and shading fixed (Not even mentioning the ears...) Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 19:54, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, ear pink STILL looks too bright (See the chart up thar ^^) And add some shading on the left hind leg xP--

To me, the eye looks weird, I can hardly tell the one pixil that's supposed to be the eye-highlight. I'm more for using a slightly darker green color so it's not so...neonish...and shade it a little bit, for that touch of realism :) Also, I think this needs a mud streak on the face, doesn't have to be big. 21:12, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Grrr, ears... Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 08:15, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

To me, the highlights are just a tad bit too bright. Looks great, by the way! 22:49, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the mudstreaks around. 02:00, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Its great! Blur the mudstreaks a bit. 17:34, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Try blurring the shading, the belly looks a bit too pale. Koisplash 04:33, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a little. 02:35, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Too much mud 16:41, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leo  pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:02, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat and the stripes so they match her apprentice image. They're too dark right now. And the mud could still be lightened or brightened a bit so it doesn't blend in so much. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:07, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The mud looks kind of black. Make it lighter. 18:12, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Storm (PH)~For Approval
Okay... Major fail on the mud streaks. I hope to get this approved before I leave for camp, if I do, I would've set a record... Anyway, Comments? <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:50, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Meh, Darken the ear pink and...have some mud streaks on the tail, Okay? 8D --

Re-uploaded. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:07, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Excuse me, Scarletwind, but I already have this up.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 08:38, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, you have Stormfur up. Scarletwind has Storm Clouds at Dusk up. Wild   breath   14:26, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud streaks longer and maybe one on the head? 18:54, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Instead of making the mud streaks longer, I just added some more. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 19:20, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks are a little too dark, lighten them a little. 00:33, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh....silly me. *slaps forehead* sorry Scarletwind.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 00:36, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Kittycat79, I actually was intending to make this Stormfur, but you got him first, but Storm looks basically the same so everything worked out perfectly! ;) <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:46, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

This looks really good! Maybe just darken the shading on the left front and back paws and the left ear to make it look more like it was behind something that cast a shadow over it.... if you know what I mean! It's kinda hard for me to explain! :P 22:36, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:50, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the ear where you can't see the earpink just a bit. Also, straighten out the mud streaks. I don't know it looks a bit odd with the mud streaks going all sort of ways. This looks wonderful! 22:37, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like the way the mud streaks look, but I'm open to other suggestions. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 15:13, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think the mud streaks are fine. Can you blur the shading more? 16:34, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My blur tool hates me today... <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 18:28, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the mudstreaks a little. Looks good. ^^ 02:37, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 17:00, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and blur the highlights. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:41, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 03:30, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

There appears to be blurred lineart on the earpink. It may be my computer. But I do see a darker strip along the earpink that needs to blend with the rest. Nice work! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  16:18, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

That might just be mud, but maybe it should be changed. Its lovely. :3 18:03, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I checked over the ear and I think what you saw was some of the blur between the ear-pink and the gray, but I fixed it. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 18:23, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Look great! ^^ Maybe just make the mud a color that stands out more agains the pelt. I'm not sure what would make it stand out more. Maybe lightening it? Or saturating it. Good job though. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:39, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm leaving for camp tomorrow and I won't be around to work on this but since tweak week starts friday, Iceheart assures me that this won't be declined. So, comment away and I'll fix it when I get back. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:37, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! 16:24, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mrrr...darken the mud ALOT(And make it correspond with the shading, it loooks too....Eh...it stands out too much) xP --

Gray (PH)~ For Approval
Comments? 19:12, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart never fails to impress. ;) Darken the ear-pink a tad and darken the shading. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 19:14, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Darken the mud-streaks. <font color="#33ccff">Snowdazzle <font color="Cyan" style="background:white;"> ROAD TRIPPP!! 19:26, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful, but on the shoulder, the stripes look a little prickly, blend it out a little. 01:49, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's really nice! But I think you should blur the stipes on the tail so that it can blend with the lighter color. 03:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

RE-uploaded- Thanks guys. 05:58, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit, along with the mud. This is pretty. So this is Gray Sky Before Dawn?(kick-butt name btw)- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 04:18, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Yup. Thanks i came up with it all by myself ;P. 05:08, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken the mud and maybe streak/smudge it a little more? I don't know...it looks like it's more on the 'orange' side than the brown, muddy color. You should also shade just under the head. This is awesome~ 22:28, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

This is really beautiful! But, yeah, I agree, smudge the mud a bit more and darken it a bit. And also, while you're at it, darken the shading on the far ear a bit, if you want :-) I really think it looks great, as all of your art does :P 02:06, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the mud a bit. Its awesome! 16:15, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks. 17:47, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back leg paws. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 22:26, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- 22:50, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

just a FEW less mud streaks 16:39, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. -- 12:58, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I'm going to be away until the fourth 00:56, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the tail highlight? Other than that, its perfect! 17:59, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Do you know how amazing this is? Also, should the neck shading be lightened, or do you think it's fine? <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Me ow 02:05, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks. 00:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I see some smudged or blurred lineart on one of the paws in the front.

Sorry that ^^ was me. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 22:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the comment above, and it should be ready. :) 23:22, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Flight (PH) - For Approval
Bleh.... this is my first one in.... a while :P Comments? 13:18, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mudstreaks more noticable, and add more of them. Blur the stripes, and fix the eye a bit. Looks great! =D 13:24, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill up the whole ear. Awesome job. <font color="#33ccff">Snowdazzle <font color="Cyan" style="background:white;"> ROAD TRIPPP!! 13:25, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, guys :) :) :) 13:37, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink now. xD And your welcome! 13:43, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded lol it wont blur anymore than that :P 14:25, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, add shading to the chin, don't make the stripes and mud overlap, define where the muscles buldge out on the shoulder and haunch. 15:15, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the mud so its easier to see. 18:23, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this good? I had some trouble with the mud because if I brightened it, it was hard to see still :P So how's this? 20:45, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the mud streaks. Darken the shading and brighten the highlights. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 20:58, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded grrrrr.... :P 21:05, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading on Flight's back and blur the shading. 08:33, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) How's this? 11:52, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Although I think there's something wrong with the mudstreaks....Besides that, looks great! 13:07, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I agree with Rainey. Can you make the mud streaks longer and thinner? Otherwise, good job! <font color="#33ccff">Snowdazzle <font color="Cyan" style="background:white;"> ROAD TRIPPP!! 16:21, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lol how's this? I darkened the mud alot and smudged it. 13:58, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her chest and under her head. Blur the mud streaks and maybe add some to her legs. Shade the tail. Besides that, it's looking rather good! 22:25, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :-) Thank you! How's this? 22:49, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Put a mud streak on the tail and more highlights 22:42, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? 22:49, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Muuuch better! I circled some places where you might want to shade though. And maybe you could add a streak of mud on the hind leg. I apologize, all I have access to at the moment is MS Paint XD 03:43, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you could use more mud, but great work! 16:04, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does this look good? 18:47, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks look better, but blur it more. 13:12, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? 18:48, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice. Only think you may need to change is make the stripes more visible. The mud covered them nearly completly. Work on the eye Paulmer 13:58, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the mudstreaks a little more scattered and random. Right now they all are going the same direction and they need to look more slapped on. ;3 20:09, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the earpink. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:43, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit. 17:32, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Meh...... does this look good? :P 23:33, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink and make the mudstreaks go in different directions. Right now they look too...uniform? Anyways, you might also want smudge the mudstreaks more also. Nice job. 01:04, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, I desaturated the earpink, but I am really struggling with the mud. When I smudged it, it just totally blocked out all the tabby stripes... so, basically, I darkened the stripes and made them more visible, but now it just clashes badly with the streaks of mud... Can someone help me make the mud look... you know, more splashed on? Thanks :) 12:30, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where is your light source? Even from above, the limbs would still have light parts. If you're having it from directly above, make sure to add light parts to the tops of the arms/front legs, the top part of the back part (ugh could I make it more confusing -_-) of the foot, and add shading to the bottom of the tail, neck, and chin, or define it if you have some. This is looking phenominal! :) 23:40, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm failing EPICALLY :P 03:16, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add one more mudstreak on the tip of the tail? Good job ^^ <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 20:31, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if it is my laptop, but the mud looks......black?(It has got to be hard to make mud look good on a BROWN cat.) Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 22:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? 03:02, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more. Its great! 16:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! How's this? (I'm hoping to get this approved soon! :P) 17:27, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, it should. Is there supposed to be mud on the face? 23:20, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, what's on the face now are tabby stripes and if I add mud to the face it'd block out the stripes. :) 00:28, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Foxleap (Alt.W) - For Approval
This was withdrawn before. Comments? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:22, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad. This is lovely! 04:34, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Define the shading on the legs, I'll have to check his charart but if it's just a pelt color change, add some more/alter stripes to make it match the warrior version. 04:38, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you'll have to make him a "Y" striped tabby to match his warrior, sorry. Also, blur the brown on his feet and tail-tip. 04:41, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Awwww danr, I hate doing Y stipes. XD Oh well. Alright, I'll redo the stripes in a little bit. XP ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:51, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Neat-o! darken the shading alittle and define it xP --

What a pwetty cat! xD Anyways, blur the brown paws more and do everything said above. Btw, I remembered that alt. tabbies didn't need to have the same kind of stripes as the warrior. Look at Silverstream's alt. for example. 07:41, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Really? They don't? Awesome! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:25, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Add some stripes to his cheeks (pic if you don't know what I mean) and add a stripe or two on his neck. -- 09:01, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Define the ear-pink and darken the shading a bit; it looks kinda flat. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 14:55, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Just add a few stripes on the neck and do what everyone stated before, I think they all covered what needs to be done here. It looks Great :) 15:04, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Foxleap.warrior.alt.png 15:53, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is light brown, not tawny. Tawny is brownish-ginger. Make it more ginger. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  16:21, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry, I thought they had to match! (I'm actually glad you don't have to change it because personally I don't like them) 16:26, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. Great work! 17:18, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Persoanlly I liked it better without the extra stripes, but oh well. *shrugs* Also, this is VERY close to Sasha's color, and she's tawny, so I think it's fine. If more people think I should change the color, then I guess I will, but for now I'm gonna keep it like this. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:50, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

I nominate Paleclaw as the best tabby maker EVER, good job! Just blur the shading on the feet and blur the earpink a little and this will be perfect. Wild fire  22:39, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Gawjus! Darken the shading on the front legs. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 23:43, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the tail, brighten the face highlight, and add a couple more stripes to the chest and shoulder; the one under the chin looks kinda out of place without others. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#bbd2e5">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#3da3ce"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:41, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful.... blur the ear pink and darken the shading on the far paws...... Looks wonderful :) 12:07, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

I understand why you'd use Sasha as a guide for tawny, but it needs to be tweaked. Use this (and I used Sasha as a guide on this, but check the history, and people said it wasn't right.) <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  17:50, July 2, 2011 (UTC):



This is amazing! (by the way I'm talking about the Foxleap image). Just darken the shading a little. Shadey  Iro Ni! 14:37, July 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Outstanding. I would suggest adding a couple smaller stripes to the paws and blurring the ear pink. 23:49, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

As mentioned above (Up in Oakheart's alt), do not use Tawnypelt's alternate as a base for tawny, since it is way too ginger. 02:55, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that is too ginger. But this is light brown, not tawny. Birchfall's is a great base. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  03:50, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Wow, I'm getting so many comments on this compared to any other charart I've ever had up. XD I tried to do everything that was listed above, but I'm sorry if I missed your comment or something by accident. This was the closet color I could get to Birchfall's alt. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:50, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm.. it still looks too brown. But, I think I can fix that for you (Or do I have to join the project to do that...?) 8\ --

Blur the tail stipes in to blend with it's surroundings. They look a little to straight and plain to me. By the way really nice. :) 01:22, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think the color looks ok. Darken the earpink a little bit. 22:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... Paleclaw, could you make the ear pink a little bit larger? It's kinda hard to see. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Ta lk 01:31, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - This color's pretty darn close to Birchfall's alt's color, so I'm gonna keep it like this now. Please don't comment on it anymore. And I darkened and reddened the earpink a bit, and redid the tail stripes to make them look more natural. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:24, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fantastic Paleclaw! Good job! =D 07:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! But the earpink is still a little hard to see... 15:59, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar(Ki)- Withdrawn
Here she is, Comments? Paulmer 21:58, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I moved it to the right section for you. Darken the shading, and I believe she had more spots. 22:06, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Ok, The changes arent showing for me yet. Added more spots and darkened shading. Paulmer 22:13, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, define her spots/stripes colors to match her leader. Since the light source is on the left, lighten up the left portion of her arms/front legs. I like this, btw! 23:05, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred. -- 23:07, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Weird, I got the colors directly from Leopardstar's leader image. Eh, Whatever. Redid the shading, and the stripes. Light source is now from the right. Paulmer 23:49, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  23:53, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Paulmer 00:04, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Again, Beacuse The shading got out of the lineart, I needed to fix it. Paulmer 00:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if your supposed to, but, make the nose a bit more visible pink, or add the pink to it. 01:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make her entire paws brown. -- 01:55, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Made the nosepink darker, fulled her paws. Paulmer 12:12, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights and darken the shading, great job!!! 14:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened shading and brightened highlights Paulmer 15:56, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights on her right hind leg less bright, or color it in. 21:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

the highlights look too light, almost white. Bluestar11796 21:39, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Paulmer 23:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Leopardstar.kit.png, and remove the whiteish spots, they're still there. 02:07, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Paulmer 13:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and lighten the highlights. 16:10, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Im afraid I'll have to withdraw this, My gimp isnt working and I cant work with other programs. Paulmer 23:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (W) - For Approval
Here she is. Not much to say, so comments? x3 01:49, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger patches more orange and less red. 01:53, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This.is.STUNNING.(Lol at first I was all like'NO fair I wanted to make Petaldust,but then again, Rainy is better at chararts than me) Do as Goldenpelt said, and define the earpink, It blends in to much.And there is coloe right under the haunch, add/darken shading to the ear farthest from us. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 01:58, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the brown parts, it just looks white and orange, not tortoiseshell. 02:02, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The white ear looks a little to light after shading.( @Maplepool I wanted to make Petaldust too! But sadly, I'm a kit :' 02:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, torties need black parts. Add much more blank to her image. And guys, you DO realize there is probably still her kit and apprentice to do? ;) Nice job Rainy! 02:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to her far ear. Great job! 09:09, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! But the earpink is hard to see, try to define it more. Shadey  Iro Ni! 14:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

No! You told Maplepool! Anyways, yeah, the ears to light. 20:35, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

MUCH better! It kinda reminds me of Spottedleaf. Only problem I see is the ear pink. It looks to triangular. 21:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh thanks. x3 I forgot to say '''Reuploaded. 21:41, July 5, 2011 (UTC)'''

Wow, this looks wonderful! One thing, is she supposed to have a white chest and paws, or is it gray? <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Ta lk 01:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It's white, it just looks gray because of the shading, but I can try to lighten it if needed. 01:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 02:08, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is one of the best tortoiseshells I've ever seen!! *.*The eye color should be saturated a bit more though, it looks gray right now. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the shading. Great job! 15:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 01:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lakeshine (W) ~ For Approval
My first no-kit image, I know, I know the earpink looks werid, I nade this image on my laptop, and I couldn't get the earpink to look right sooo I just made it look as best I can.nComments? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 02:08, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the gray patches. -- 02:17, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Try to blend the gray and white together a little more. It looks a little spontaneous. Try blurring it again, maybe? And make the highlights a tad bit more visible.( Sorry, edit conflict. That's why I put the white and gray thing. ) 02:21, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, smudge the patches into her fur, add/define shading on tail, and when you fix the earpink make sure to make it bigger ;) 02:35, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm reuploaded, changes not showing. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 07:02, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Don't know if it's me, but the earpink is like, slanted. Also I can't see the shading. Add shading and fix earpink Paulmer 12:11, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Paulmer, no you're right. The earpink needs to stand up- it's as if it fell over! 14:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the needed places, like where there would be shadows. Maybe add a patch of gray to the head (a smaller one), make the earpink triangular (like previously stated), and maybe make the back hind paw gray. 14:19, July 5, 2011 (UT,C)

Lol I know, I was like 'It dpolphin dived to the ear!' xD Ok, I will get right on it, and if the earpink doesn't look right, could someone fix the earpink for me? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 21:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

VICTORY!!!!I GOT THE EARPINK TO LOOK NORMAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (<--- abuse of the '!'s) Ok darkend the shading, fixed the earpink, should I darken the gray pathces, it looks to bright to me....., Comments? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 21:58, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the gray patches in the same direction. Also I would darken the shading on the head, chest, and legs. Blur the shading on the tail and back. Nice job so far, Maplepool. 02:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Ok so I darkend the patches(like I wanted to), re sumged the pathces, comments? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 03:06, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/add shading. I can't really see much right now. And lighten the eyes a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:13, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded, Comments? (Why is the image next to the title?) Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 13:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yay thank you whoever fixed it~ Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 13:55, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

That was me. =P Your welcome! 13:56, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. 15:51, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- Back shading blurred. Comments? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 18:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Gawjus, gurl, gawjus! Add/darken shading on legs. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 22:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, fixed leg shading, comments? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, some of the splotches are darker than the others, or maybe that's just the shading. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 01:30, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 02:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oakheart (A) - For Approval
Ear pink on apprentices is a pain. Dx Comments? 02:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too pink, take it directly off of one of his images. Blur the haunch shading. Define the shading on the tail. 02:58, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

See? It's a tad bit duller

Darken the shading on the far back leg (if you know what im talking about xD) Looks great!! Good job :) 09:11, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:21, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights a tad bit more visible. Really nice, though! 20:39, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:33, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice, Goldenpelt. I know how annoying ear pink on apprentices can be...but...can you make it just a tad bit larger? <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Ta lk 01:35, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and yes, make the earpink a bit larger. 23:16, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brightsky (W) - For Approval
Woot. so i herd u liek mudkips??? 03:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, Nightflower! Lighten the earpink just a tad, and brighten the highlighs on the head a bit more. 03:39, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Bee-oo-tee-fool! Reminds me of Mapleshade ;) Add a light part to her front legs/arms, and to the top of her hind foot. 03:51, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:32, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is so good! :) blur the highlights a bit! But, super awesome job! ;D 09:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

so u herd rite!!! But yes, this is amazing xD. Darken the stripes a bit and blur the highlights. Great job! 11:44, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights a little to bright. I don't know how to make it less bright but, blur it as everyone else says. And, yeah, it looks a lot like Mapleshade! 20:42, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks to.....violet colored...and Mudkip is a pokemon, a very awesome pokemon. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 20:45, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. I like this! <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:06, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - lawl. GIMP crashed on me and didn't save my layers, so it's gonna be a little hard to edit it. Oh well; might redo it later :P 22:58, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shadings to dark. Lighten it up a bit. Overall really nice! 23:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Just blur the shading along her back a tad more. 00:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The colours in the white look all messed up. Blur it out or change the image to png., because the white has like a rainbow in it. 01:24, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the neck shading just a tad? Otherwise, this is amazing! <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Ta lk 01:27, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! lighten the front leg. 15:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''I'm gonna redo this in a bit. '''Oh, and Iceheart, I can't turn this into a .png, because if I do, I won't be able to upload it. Also, excuse late uploads, Sims 3 and laziness are a deadly combination :3 01:20, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:53, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar (Q) ~ For Approval
Aww, she's such a pretty queen! I played around with the smudge tool, and I must say that I like the results! By the way, hope you guys had a nice fourth of July! 04:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the cream portions a bit more to match the leader art and blend the shadows more.

Reuploaded 04:54, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Color the white spot on her tail. 06:38, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The white spot is supposed to be cream like on her other images. 14:11, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

this looks good, but the "cream" seems more white, the earpink is barely visible and pretty trans



parent, and, to me, the stripes, or, more of, lack of, look weird where i circled in red Bluestar11796 21:37, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's a little strip of pixels next to the haunch that is lighter than the shading, so make it so it matches the shading color. Also, make the earpink bigger. 22:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)



Alright, I've circle the gray portions that need fixing(No, it's not just the tail) I dont know if you put them there on purpose, but try to fill them in. --

Make the parts of the stripes that are on the patches of cream a darker cream, rather than brown. 00:38, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a lot. You can barely see it right now. Good job though, it looks great! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:15, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Its so pretty! =) Fic the gray parts, define the earpink, and blur the shading in the middle. 15:45, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lilystem (w) ~ For approval
Alright, I used the earpink from her Queen and sent the finished charart to Nightflower, to see if it was all right. She told me to darken it, so I did a tad. If it still needs some work, could someone get me a color for it? Anyways, My first warrior! 14:15, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This looks beautiful! Blur the shading a bit! Good job! 14:20, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reaname this Lilystem.Warrior.Png Add light part to the front legs and to the top of the foot. The earpink looks a little bright, but I'll have to check her queen image 14:22, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, it's fine. But you need to darken the fur to match the queen. 14:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good, blur the shading, add highlights. Plus, when you re-upload, please just keep the same name and overwrite the old image. Paulmer 15:59, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Before I start to remake the image, I have a few things to clarify xD @Ivystripe - I got the base color from the queen already, so where exactly do I have to darken it? @Paulmer - I do have highlights, and it's not required to have highlights anyways :) 16:02, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, her coat just seems darker but I think the image needs tweaked in tweek week, I see many mistakes so I guess it doesn't matter then. 16:18, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and Re-Named. Alright, I'll keep it at this color then. 17:07, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink, and darken the shading on the tail. 01:58, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

darken the shading overall, and darken the earpink. 15:35, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I darkened the shading, but I'm not too happy with it and I tried blurring it all I can. 19:09, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Its pretty good! The tail shading still doesn't look right, though. Either lighten the highlights or darken the shading. 21:08, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower(Queen)~Declined


Okay, here's Rainflower. I think I did pretty good. The two things that are bothering me are the earpink's shape and the eyes. I may need a little help finding the perfect eye color anyway. But yeah. Here she is! Hope you like her!!! 16:42, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The eye color is fine, you just need to add shading and highlights to them. The earpink is touching the ear, so erase some of it so that it doesn't. 16:46, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make her pale gray to match her description. 16:47, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's a couple pixels on the belly and front leg (closest to us.), So fix them please :) Also, add a speck of white to each eye and define the shading once you lighten the image :) 17:00, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Where the shading is placed looks a little odd. Maybe follow this guide so the shading makes more sense. 20:26, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and make the belly highlight larger. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:08, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think there might need to be a white pixel type thing in the eyes. 22:08, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Ivyheart's right. Add the white pixle in the eye so it'll look better x) --

Move the earpink over, it is touching the lineart, and Honeybreeze, are you listed? I looked and didn't find your name in kits, apprentices, warriors or Sr. Warriors. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:37, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ya sorry you're not a member, and if yo were, you would be a kit, and kits cant put charart for approval. Sorry this will be declined. 00:46, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (W) - For Approval
Finally, a long haired cat >_>. Comments? 19:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Define the shading and the earpink. 19:22, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:32, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

make the highlights a little lighter and the stripes on the tail more defined 20:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:29, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Aw I love his tail! Lighten the earpink. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:10, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little bit so the smudges blend better with the pelt. This looks good. :) 02:10, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe shorten the tail a bit more? It seems a bit long for a 'short, stout tailed cat' as the description says. Other than that, I see nothing wrong, this is wonderful! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is! :P Can you add some highlighting/shading to the front leg? 15:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) 16:09, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Should the earpink be a little lighter? 23:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me! <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:58, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! (Ya know this kinda looks like my charart xD) De-saturate the earpink and maybe add highlights to the the front legs and pawz --

Rainflower (Q) ~ For Approval
First charart! Comments? This was declined before... <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 01:32, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

In some places around the lineart, it's pixlated. So blur or smudge it so it's all around the same color. Blur the darker shading on the back and tail, and fill the ear in more with the earpink. 01:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might have to redo this because it's all pixelated. 02:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed. Try basing the eyes off of one of the other queens for approval, like Brook. 02:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Save it as a .png not a .jpg, move the earpink make it a tad bigger and darken it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 02:22, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is a .png Maplepool, but it looks like it WAS a .jpg before. You'll probably have to redo this, sorry. D: ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:20, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, define the earpink, fix the eyes...and thats it! :D 15:27, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

OH! I know what you did, you used the 'Sharpen tool' Didn't you? I think Gimp might have I don't know, as I have never used it, don't use it, it kills the quailty of a image, when you redo her image, give her a pink-gray nose, like Feathertail an Crowfeather and Jayfeather's kit image, or Marshscar/star's Leader image, it looks like the nose is the same color as the pelt. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 18:21, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll redo it, I don't really care. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded or Re-Done ~ Gosh, this looks WAYYY better! <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It does. :D Blur the earpink. 23:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Comments? <font color="lime" style="background:Blue"> ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 23:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 02:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (A) - For Approval
My first one! I know the highlights are bad but I kinda suck at it. >,< I didn't know if I could put it up because her warrior one is currently in the making, but I used that as a guide. Comments? -- 21:38, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the stuff around the tail, and get rid of those pixels. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:45, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploded. How can I fix the hind leg highlights, or is it fine? I already tried blurring it. 21:58, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um, did you add the hind leg highlight more than three times? <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 22:43, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Can you define the earpink by lightening it and blur the highlights more? 23:06, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um, yeah, I think so. Only for the hind leg one, though. I'll try to blur some more. 23:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

the chest seems too gray, i think it should have no white (or in this case, gray) Bluestar11796 23:36, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploded. '''I blurred the highlights some more. I think their fine now. I got the earpink color from her warrior version. I lightened it up a bit, but I didn't want to to much because it would look different. I got the white chest also from her warrior version, so I just put it in. Instead, should I lighten it up? 23:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I tried making the chest lighter by putting the normal white color and smudging it around. 23:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The chest fur looks way too smudged. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:04, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. 00:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)'''

Oooh, I like this! Add/darken shading on legs. :) <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste off the lineart at the back of the haunch ;) 02:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, nice job for your first charart! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  03:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw(SC)(A) - For Approval
FIRST OFF, Im sorry beacuse I have NO CLUE on how to move this article to the correct section.. SORRY! xD. Anyway this is HONEYPAW <3. Comments? Paulmer 00:26, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be declined. You already have Leopardstar's kit image up for approval. ☾Moonflight☽ 00:32, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I withdrew it, beacuse my GIMP crashed and lost everything.Paulmer 00:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Then, how did you create this? ☾Moonflight☽ 01:56, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I went ahead and moved this, but if you worked on this, you can work on Leopardstar's kit. This will be declined. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  03:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar(W)- For Approval
If this shows up twice, my laptop is failing. Bird hasn't been moved/archived, but the CBA is over and should be approved whenever a lead comes around. If this needs to be removed, I'm sorry and will take it again. I like this, comments? <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  03:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, Nice! Blur the tail rings towards the tailtip ;D 03:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Blurring this was hard! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  03:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)