Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 163

Cypresspaw (Alt A) - Approved
So my tablet is acting up...lol. I like this though. Comments? 13:38 Mon Nov 28

define shading, great job —  Minkclaw   15:07, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine, no? Maybe smooth it out? - Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  20:27, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I can barely see most of it. It needs defining in my opinion..=/ —  Minkclaw   22:19, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

looks plenty visible to me. 22:25, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I agree with Jose1116, maybe smooth out the shading a little bit. Winterpaw:  I am  a  true Monster  02:26, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

I can see it on the screens for my iPhone 7, desktop, and laptop. It's fine.

Darken the shading a bit on the hip? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:35, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

The description on her page has changed a lot; the cite that was on there was incorrect, as Kate made a mistake in her description, but it was never changed on here to what she said later. Cypress is now a brown-and-white she-cat with hazel eyes^^

Yeah, and that needs to be held off on until a cite can be obtained where she clearly says it was a mistake. I see nothing in that cite that says that, and we are not responsible for citation digging.

Sorry for being pre-emptive^ Probably should have cited the all the screen-caps at once, but as of now, there are multiple screen-caps on her page that cite Kate saying it was indeed a mistake on her part.

I lost the file, so before I reupload this, what the hell is going on with it? On another note, I am going to use both files I have for this since she will need to have an alt either way... I do need to know which description is which... 20:59 Mon Dec 5

This will be an alt. If you want to keep this as the alt instead of the normal image, you can change your reservation.

Updated. 20:38 Thu Dec 8

Comments before approval? 00:05, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Approved.

Birdwing (W) - Approved
my first warrior. ~Patch   feather~   18:45, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

smudge/blur ear pink it looks a bit blocky —  Minkclaw   21:44, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' ~Patch    feather~   22:09, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps smooth out the shading on the cheek? - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:59, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define the paler muzzle please. It's more emphasized on the other images. 02:19, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  ~Patch    feather~   19:55, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading? And is it just me, or is it leaking away from the back a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:45, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I checked and it doesn't look like it. ~Patch   feather~   14:12, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink looks too faint maybe make it lighter?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:14, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' ~Patch    feather~   21:46, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 00:05, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Approved.

Dewpaw (HJ) (A) - Approved
21:19, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

could you smoothen the haunch texture some —  Minkclaw   23:07, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:19, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading on hip, and maybe make the ear pink stand out a little more from the gray by making it brighter/more saturated, if you don't mind? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:58, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:09, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 00:21, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:03, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 00:04, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Approved.

Fidgetpaw (ki) - Approved
Smaller blanks make this pattern extremely difficult.

define shading —  Minkclaw   11:41, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

i (think) theres a speck of waste out his back. 17:36, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

I'd rather not define the shading; it's gonna be difficult to see because of the black placement, but I can see it fine on all three of my screens.

Re-uploaded. Pattern tweak + waste.

Comments before approval? holy crap my computer just flickered on and off while saying that ... uhh, this may be a bad sign. 00:04, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Approved.