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Cow(R) - For Approval
Alright, so unless it says in the books she was named after the apperance of a cow, I'm giving her the apperance of my cat since the last time I did that, the cat's description was magically changed by an author later on, so let's try this pattern again. The eyes are also a warmer green color but if they look too yellow I can tweak them a bit. But yeah, as always, if something's outta place then just tell me! I had fun with this  01:33, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her side just a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 04:42, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge (i assume thats what you did, judging by how it looks) the shading a lot more. I can /see/ the smudge marks... 10:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't smudge on Sai. She has fur texture  04:53, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Either way, I can see strange markings on the main body where I think the shading is meant to be. 13:42, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Yes, I plan on working on her tonight, offline has been kicking my ass  04:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  05:34, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but the white can stand to be smoothed out a little more. It looks sharp on the chest and the shading still looks a tad blotchy. 22:07, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

How/where is it exactly blotchy? 05:36, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

I guess just smooth it out in general

I think the image could be darkened a tad. 21:56, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Just a reminder here to not forget to upload! 02:56, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not, remember that I have obligations outside of the Wiki and I will reupload in the timeframe allotted   04:50, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  07:19, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Hate to break the CBA, but I think the dot on her hind leg can stand to be blurred/smudged a little more. 07:56, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Also, the forepaw closest to us looks kind of gray. 06:13, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

The chest can be smudged and the shading could be msoothed out some more. 13:50, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the white should be smudged/blurred more, if you don't mind. 20:26 Thu Nov 26

I've already stated this, but I cannot smudge on Sai  08:58, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Mistpelt (Star) - For Approval
tired lil elder cat 03:50 Fri Nov 13

sharpen and expand the shading

I don't think she should sharpen it but she could definitely blur it and expand it a lot. 07:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's like a dot in the far lower left corner? 13:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 02:35 Sat Nov 14

expand the shading everywhere, especially on the tail. Define the light on the legs.

reuploaded. redid shading again. idk if this is good or not 22:41 Tue Nov 17

Comments before approval? 01:01, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading depth could be defined a lot. It's looking a bit flat on the tail and forelegs.

There's a weird streak of pale texture on the tail.. mind fixing that? 21:47, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 03:06, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. redid shading. again. 03:18 Sun Nov 22

Comments before approval? 00:06, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading on the legs is still flat

it's fine. I took a look at her file and that's the best she can get it without having it look even worse. re-CBA? 05:44, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Nope. just because she can't do it, doesn't mean it's fine. please define it, it looks very flat. 04:55, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

that's what i've been trying to do for the past 3 uploads. can you possibly give me a hint on to how to deepen it then? cause nothing i'm doing seems to work. 01:41 Wed Nov 25

Perhaps add a new layer of thinner, darker shading?

I can't see where the light source is. Could you define it? 20:25 Thu Nov 26

Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Dust Muzzle (ES) - For Approval
I totally forgot I had this file saved under the wrong name and just uploaded it as was without changing the name. :P Sorry to ask, but could someone fix that for me? Anyway, I'm really happy with this, trying to match the kit was definitely interesting. ^^ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:24, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

define the chest shading

Reuploaded. Also put more pale fur on the hip, it seemed to cut off awkwardly before. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:41, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hind legs. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:40, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

still working? 05:21, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Yes. It's only been two days since I've been given something to tweak, give me a chance to get to it. :) I'll try and upload the changes tonight. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:52, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:55, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tail

Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:06, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Gooseberry (Q) - For Approval
the base itself is actually really pale... if I lighten the image too much more, I don't think I'm going to be able to see it, so please keep that in mind. Base =/= stripes, and I think you can have darker stripes on a paler base.

Define the head shading a tad? Lovely. ~Russettail13

Re-uploaded.

define the shading on the legs 02:43, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading everywhere. My macbook shows everything darker and I still can't see it on the screen. 11:16, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I am not used to this color in the least.

If you could, perhaps define the facial shading a little bit? I cannot see any shading on my screen. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:15, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is a very difficult color to shade.

Define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us? And if possible, could you define the facial shading some more? Perhaps adding some depth might work? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:14, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. If someone could give me some shading color advice, that would be appreciated. I'm currently using an orange-brown, but are there other colors that would work better? (just not green ;;; )

Maybe just black? :P Can you smudge the earpink a little? Sorry if this seems nitpicky. 18:44, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

use dark red. it's really good for golden cats.

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Shading might be a tad flat in places, but I like this coloring much better.

Could you thicken it on the tail a little? 03:23 Sun Nov 22

Re-uploaded.

Comments before approval? 00:05, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, the shading could stand to be defined on the legs as it looks on the tail and belly. By that i think i mean add some depth 11:49, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, but you do know that shading thickness, definition, darkness, ect, doesn't need to be the same throughout the entire image, right?

I'm going to be that person but I seriously still can't see any shading on the face, and legs

And I don't understand how you can't see anything. My laptop and phone both show tons of shading. If I tweak this again, I'm going to be in the same boat as the first time I redid the shading, and it feels like I'm going in circles. =/

Sharpening the facial shading and the leg shading might help with the visibility issue. I can't really see it either. 07:25, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I already talked with Fox about that and I hate the sharpen tool.

Try adding a layer of shading depth in black, or maybe add some highlights. It is still pretty hard to see... 11:43, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. >.>

Too many issues. Withdrawing.

I'll take over

re-ups

Could you smoothen the shoulder shading? Also, I believe there is some shading leaking out from there. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:07, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading? 20:23 Thu Nov 26

re-ups~

Echosnout (Star) ~ For Approval
The MC is hard to match. 23:33, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white parts a lot, and smudge the earpink a little more. 00:17, Nov. 21, 2015 (UTC)

for some reason the eyes look strange to me... Maybe define the gradient of them?

Reupload I tried moving the pupil's away from the lighter part of the eye. 19:48, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the main body shading a bit? 17:22 Sun Nov 22

Smudge the black a bit more.

Reupload 19:18, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

define your light source on the chest

You mean cover the light spot? It's usually fine with other images, and the light source is coming from the <---. 04:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

if it's coming from <== there, then the leg shading is in the wrong place. Switch it, please.

No, the light source is coming from there. The shading will be ==> that way then. 07:45, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ahh, I see. I thought you meant that the light was hitting <== this way. But that means the chest shading is in the wrong direction. Perhaps flip that around?

I'm sorry I'm still confused. 20:41, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just swap the position of the chest shading around. 23:30, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I think I understand what you mean now. 07:29, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Note quite. This is what I meant for you to do with the chest: http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283593286300.png

Reupload Like that? 19:40, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you get rid of some of the shading on <== side of the chest? Now the whole chest looks shaded, whereas part of the chest on that side should be in light like Fox's image shows. 21:53, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:21, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the white, like on the mc? 20:22 Thu Nov 26

Reupload 20:57, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Moss Tail (ES) ~ For Approval
Tis who has done terrible tinted shading and shall never do thy again? Tis I has done the job and tis failed terribly. 17:00, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on the overall body?--Dewsplash (talk) 17:12, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is just horrifying 17:31, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading? 17:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

I can't tell if it's the shading or not, but he looks awfully green.

I see red, Maybe change the shading tint to blue of black? 18:00, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up im cring in le inside. 21:49, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

The tail is looking a little bit flat. If the tail's supposed to be in entire shadow, perhaps add some depth to it. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:06, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? 20:20 Thu Nov 26

Juniper Branch (Q) ~ For Approval
not that happy with it but another smoke tortie 11:13, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the main body shading a little bit? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:15, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded tried to, its hard to define it on this colouring 07:44, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Shattered Ice(ES) ~ For Approval
About half of the time I spent of this image was on shading. 15:06 Wed Nov 25

Define the shading on the stomach & tail? Lovely! Sorry about commenting on the shading >3<   15:18, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! 16:45 Wed Nov 25

Expand and define shading i can hardly make it out 17:58, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'll probably be told to lighten it, but whatever. 3:11 Thu Nov 26

The lightness looks ok to me. But perhaps smooth it out - I can see the smudge lines very, very clearly. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:15, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I swear, I did actually smudge the shading on every layer, even if it looks pretty similar to what it looked like before. <span style="">14:36 Thu Nov 26

Jackdaw's Cry (es) ~ For Approval
I set title as evaluation since i dont know if anyone promoted me to an apprentice, I actually like this! 15:58, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. This is just a personal preference, but the eyes look slightly cross-eyed. Perhaps fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:04, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

You already had one image approved, so you should very much be an apprentice, hence why I'm changing it now. Sorry about not being able to give you the file; I've been really busy the past two days or so. x.x It doesn't look like you quite need it though.

re-up Thanks Snowed and Blossom! 05:40, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear. Very nice! 06:16, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Thank you Bluestar! :) 16:00, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Nettlebreeze (Star) - For Approval
Shaggy old guy :D

Ooh, beautiful. The shadow on the chest is contradicting to the light source. Perhaps you could swap that around? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:03, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:42, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Man, I love his eyes. Can you smooth out the shading on his arms? 20:56, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Swift Minnow (ES) - For Approval
This has faint texture on it, correct? Because my monitor's being weird, and I can't really tell too well. 21:35, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

yes it does but its much more blurred than that. yours tbh kinda looks like she's got visible veins. Also could you smooth out the shading some more? 23:36, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred the texture and shading. Already this image is a nightmare, especially given I can hardly see what I'm doing. What is wrong with my monitor?? 01:10, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Quick Water (ES) ~ For Approval
Good morning (first sunny day Shanghai's had in weeks)

I realized there's waste. I'll fix that later.

Re-uploaded

pretty! could you smoothen out the shading on the shoulder a little bit? <span style="">03:45 Fri Nov 27

Re-uploaded Thank you! I hope this made any difference...

Red Claw (ES) ~ For Approval
03:17, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

I doubt you need it, but would you like the file or either his rogue or loner? (I can always shoot it to you in the morning) The colors and texture are a bit....misleading, to say the least. =P If you don't want it, that's fine, although would you mind softening the texture a little bit? it's not quite as distinctive on his other images.

Define the light on the face

Morning Fire (K) - For Evaluation
My first charcat - I'm also not sure if I got the right template, and if I didn't, I'm sorry because I got a little confused on her page. Thanks. Comments? Misty~ (talk) 07:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's dark brown - darken the color please.

Re-uploaded (I think this is how you do it? Sorry, I'm new to all of this...) Misty~ (talk) 07:22, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

that's exactly what I wanted you to do. Darken it some more, and I'll promote you into an apprentice, since you clearly know what you're doing.

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing at the moment though (For me at least). And thanks

Morning Fire is such a cool name. Can you make the earpink less neon please? 13:49, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please. Very nice! 14:30, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Misty~ (talk) 03:21, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the color could be darkened. Look at Moss Tail's charart for some reference.

Re-uploaded Is it a bit too dark now..? Misty~ (talk) 05:21, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Song (Q) - For Approval
Okay, so it says "splotchy brown", so I wasn't quite sure what to do... given that the white was specifically said to be on the paws and tail tip, I don't think putting it anywhere else is the right thing...

Wow! Awesome job with the splotches! Define shading everywhere? <span style="">20:18 Thu Nov 26

One Eye (DF) - For Approval
easy pattern easy thanksgiving 09:08, November 27, 2015 (UTC)