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Discussion
Hello, everyone. There is a topic that has recently come to my attention. Please state you're opinions and inputs here. Thank you. :) 00:14, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar~Silver nominaion
YatzSilversword here. I think Pinestar is ready for a silver nomination. His article looks good. Deputy of HollyClan 13:19, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar's Prophecy needs major expansion. 14:34, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Yatz? 20:29, February 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * It looks like Yatz isn't working on this. I'll see what I can do. 23:55, February 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm doing the best I can. 17:25, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm doing the best I can. 17:25, February 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * Okay. You hadn't replied, so I assumed you had abandoned it.
 * Nope! 17:07, February 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yatz, are you still working on this? It's been up for over a month now. 20:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yatz, are you still working on this? It's been up for over a month now. 20:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nightkit~Silver nomination
YatzSilversword here. Her page can't be expanded by far, so its ready I'm sure. Yatz Talk  16:06, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can Bluestar's Prophecy and Codes of the Clans be expanded? 18:06, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly, but she is a minor character, so it can't b expanded a lot. 22:53, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, but her gender needs to be cited. 21:58, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Her gender is cited. What now? 22:59, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Check to make sure her history is as expanded as possible. Particularly the Bluestar's Prophecy section. 23:03, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

It is as far as I know. She's a very minor character. ✳  YatzSliversword   Let it snow...  ✳ 19:25, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

There really isn't anything that can be added, can there? As Yatz said, Nightkit is a very minor character. We don't even know her description. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 19:41, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Have you checked? If you have, it's okay. But, please check if you haven't. 21:06, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm checking now. I looked in BP, and it does not say the description of Nightkit. Only Tigerkit's description is mentioned. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 00:40, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know. I meant the history. 15:52, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Comments
Hi, everyone. I've noticed a trend in recent comments. "Supporting!" "I support." "Looks good. Supporting." These are just to name a few. These are not constructive. They just take up space and clutter our news feeds. So please, don't comment just to say, "Supporting." If, however, no constructive comments have been left for more than 24 hours, you can say, "I see nothing wrong. Wonderful job," or something like that that is more or less a proper sentence. If this has been done, however, don't comment at all. I'm sure the nominator appreciates, compliments, but would much rather hear critisim above all on what they can improve. I know I would. 22:35, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower - Silver Nomination
Hi, I checked out everything, even fixed a few things. I'm pretty sure her page is ready. Feathe r  moon Of NightClan...  00:04, March 2, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I wonder, may there be a quote that can be found for her? Other than that, I see nothing wrong with Morningflower's page. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 19:38, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, she needs a main quote and a couple other quotes. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 21:13, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * River, there may only been a main quote. I mean, she's not really said anything quote worthy, with the exception of when she's with Ferncloud. Unless I missed something. Cloud  skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 00:50, March 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, as long as the quote shows her personality, its okay, right? 00:52, March 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * I would assume so. That would be a question for one of the higher-ups. Cloud  skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 19:47, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

In the case of a minor character like this, if something is said, it more than likely should be quoted. 21:17, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, unless somebody can find a quote, i cant. Its hard find one sentence in a whole book, and you have to look in a couple books to. User:Feathermoon/Sig' 01:05, March 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

It doesn't look like you've been working on this, so if you want, I can take over... 22:22, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wait! I'm going through every book she appears in and i'm teying to find a quote! I'm still on it! Feathermoon 23:08, March 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Okay, great! I just thought since there hadn't really been any comments for a long time...XD 23:09, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I really hate to say this because i usually do things on my own, but can someone help me just find a main quote? She barley says ANYTHING worth it. From what I can see, really all she does is give thankful looks, dirty looks, or doesn't even look at all. 04:58, March 19, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Mistystar ~ Gold Nomination
Third gold article up for nomination! I know I need to expand alot, so I want to know the exact books I need to expand. But I am working on some books currently. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 01:17, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really tell you which articles to expand, but, what about another quote or two? I know there may be a few more that could be used. If need be, River, I can find you one. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 01:27, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

No thanks Cloudskye, I added one more quote to her. I'll find another as soon as I can. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 01:59, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

The PO3 section needs the most expansion, followed by the NP series. 21:19, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Moonflight, I'll get right to it. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 21:24, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

PO3 is expanded, working on NP Series. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 00:03, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

NP Series Expanded! 21:19, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 20:15, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 14:39, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Voting
If you nominated an article, are you allowed to vote on it? 23:07, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. 15:54, March 5, 2011 (UTC)'

Oh, okay. Thanks. 00:29, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Screech of Angry Owl ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded his information and added a few quotes. Comments? River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 15:35, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with it, great job! Feathermoon 17:29, March 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The quotes you chose are good. I see nothing wrong with nominating Screech. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 20:01, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 14:05, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join?
Hi! My name is Iceleap. I joined a while ago, but have been inactive the past few months. But lets cut to the chase:

I was wonering if I could join Project:Characters. I have read all the books and I think I could be a valuable person to add to the project.

Thank you,

May Starclan light your path, Iceleap 23:00, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. I'll add you in momentarily. 23:06, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

FuryClaw joining
'''I want to disscuss me join. I would be a valuable member. I have a really strong knowlege of the series. My Fury will stay in my claws unless needed.'''

FuryClaw

I'm glad you want to join, and I hope you will contribute to the project with your strong knowledge of the series. I'll add you in momentarily. If you have any questions, consult any of our leads (including me) or consult our FAQ. 19:42, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool ~ Silver nomination
Added quotes, expanded history. Comments? 22:14, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can Forest of Secrets be expanded anymore? If not, then supporting. Oh and I fixed the spacing on A Dangerous Path. 01:20, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

...I don't think so, she doesn't really appear that much in the series. And, thanks! 20:37, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur ~ Silver nomination
Added main quote and other quotes. Comments? 22:30, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can the Original Series be expanded any further? 01:23, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

No, not really. 20:42, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Night of No Stars ~ Silver nomination
Added main quote and other quote. Comments? 22:40, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can Outcast be expanded? And is it possible to get one more quote? 01:24, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try that. :) 20:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I added a quote, and expanded Outcast. I couldn't really do much, because I don't own the book... 21:15, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to help? 'Cause I have Outcast. 14:01, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Raindrop ~ Silver nomination
It looks good to me. Comments? 11:42, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a main quote and at least one more quote. If you need any help, I'll help you. 20:16, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I would appreciate the help. Could I put "Yeah-but we should do it better." for Raindrop's main quote? 10:22, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

If he's a minor character, you can use pretty much any quote as a main quote. Does he speak much? River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 14:30, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

She's a very minor character. She only speaks two senteces, and that's all. The one I asked if it could be a quote was the longest sentence she spoke in this book. So is that quote okay? 10:35, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Definitely, and then just put the other quote on her page as well. 14:00, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Featherstar~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 05:25, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Her article looks very good, but is it possible to add one more quote? If not, supporting. 14:07, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Smoketalon~ Silver Nomination
Looks good to me. 05:25, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks perfect, I see nothing wrong with him. Good job, Iceheart! =) 14:08, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Leaving for real
Hey everyone, it's me Riverpelt, I have decided I will be leaving this wiki. I feel I have done all I can do but I'll never ever forget any of you. It's been an honor serving as senior warrior, but it's time I must leave. I wish my name be removed from the members list, but I hope you all will never forget me as I won't forget you. Thank you. 16:52, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Style of History sections
Many sections of cat's histories contain the following formulae, which in my opinion, should be eliminated:
 * In this book...
 * During this book...
 * Early in the book...
 * Later in the book...
 * At the beginning of the book...
 * At the end of the book...
 * (S)he is first seen when...
 * (S)he is last seen when...
 * (S)he is seen only when...
 * (S)he is seen only a couple of times
 * (S)he is not seen after this
 * ...and similar

These are not necessary. For instance, it is obvious that the first paragraph in a section describes when he/she is "first seen", or that the section about a book describes what happened "in this book" etc.

Kind regards, 19:17, March 19, 2011 (UTC)