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Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:09, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Try...Making the floof more fluffy and shaggy. It looks spikey now. :S 18:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Dazzly? o3o 09:59, 14, 06, 2012

Uhm...withdrawing. ^^; *is no good at floofs* 10:12, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3 16:54, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. ^^ 05:45, 15, 06, 2012

Add a little more floof on the haunch. 22:35, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, Silver only just took over and hasn't uploaded yet. Please don't comment if she still hasn't uploaded... 05:02, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ohmaigawsh I killed it ;3;. 23:33, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Add more floof, or define it. =3 23:43, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added a few, and defined a few too. 23:05, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the lineart on the haunch and back a bit smoother. It's a bit, for lack of better word (not meant as an insult) messy in those spots. 05:20, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded No offense taken. 17:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the shaggy lineart on the haunches to two pixels. And the colored part of (our left) haunch looks like it has darker pixels towards the top, try smudging over it with the original color or try color picking from the original color and going over that part. 21:43 Mon Jun 18 Reuploaded Sorry if it doesn't look thick enough, pixlr only has odd numbers for brush sizes. If it doesn't look thick enough, it'll be fixed. 11:52, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it still needs to be thickened. Could you also add more "fur" within the shagginess (dunno how to explain >.<), like add more lines of fur on the attached lines of fur. xD 08:13, 20, 06, 2012

Reuploaded 16:50, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the haunch facing away from us to two pixels. 21:51 Wed Jun 20

Reuploaded 23:35, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thin out the lineart in some places? It looks too thick now xP Skt Spoilers... 13:06, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:18, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Near the top of the tail looks like some miscolored pixels. Can you fix those? 19:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur stick out more like the other images, rather then curve a bit. It should basically stand on end, like he got electrocuted or something. 22:50, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not good at tail tweaking... o3o Withdrawn. 22:59, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 99.58.201.247 23:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * That was me. o.e  23:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur at the base of the tail stick out more. 23:02, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, please don't critique the charart if the user taking over hasn't uploaded yet. 05:40, 16, 06, 2012

Reuploaded I tried :P  02:35, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more....poofy, for want of a better word. Skt Spoilers... 00:12, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Widen the tail a bit. =P 00:55, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little white pixel on the tail. Kinda towards the base, on the top.... *fails at describing where* 05:24, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

That's supposed to be there, dear. Zoom in and you'll see it's the space between to pieces of fluff. 00:48, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E) ~Withdrawn
OA was Sandstar12, and was redone by Paleh. I just made him more brown. Pad foot Mischief Managed 10:39, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

It almost looks like it's tinted pink... Can you make it more darker/browner? 19:41, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Stretch the ear-pink a bit bigger and darken it a tad 22:38, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the image. Breeze whisker  23:59, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkend him, desaturated the image, and tweaked the earpink. Comments? Pad foot Mischief Managed 01:54, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Grounded for a week, can no one take this? If Paleh wants it, she can have it, but if she doesn't, can I still have it. Didn't plan on getting grounded. Pad foot Mischief Managed 02:52, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and the "highlights" the image looks bit flat. 20:53, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Maple, remember to mark your image as withdrawn. And Cinder, don't comment on images that are withdrawn. I can take this, but you'd have to wait a little bit as I don't have an open space right now. But I do have all the layers and would be more than willing to do this when I have space. 03:36, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (A) - Tweaked
...Ooohhh... That looked so much better in photoshop... Anyway, shading needed to be redone and pelt color had to be darker. OA was me. Comments? 23:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful, but This could be my computer, I see like, a ring around his hind leg shading (Its light). I suggest maybe blurring it. -- 18:44, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his front leg and back. -- 20:15, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:37, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him a bit to match and blur the haunch and back shading, they're a bit blotchy. 11:09, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:55, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Pebble (CG) - Redone
Ahh I've just been waiting to kill this. One of my first approved images. Needed to be pale gray, but otherwise I redid out of preference. OA was me. Comments? 02:36, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

define the shading a little bit --<span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   00:26, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:52, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Furzepelt (A) - Redone
Needed to match her warrior. OA was Shelly. 02:06, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading just a smidge? ^^  20:08, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:06, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the gray a tad, I can barely see it. 11:17, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:33, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo) ~ Withdrawn
Twas too dark and green. OA twas Thistle. Geez this sucks  Skt Spoilers... 07:32, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. Shut up, Skt.

Re-uploaded. I tried. Never. Skt Spoilers... 07:45, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some. You better   08:01, 20, 06, 2012

the shading still looks green... make it more red. -- 20:40, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt Spoilers... 07:33, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit maybe, Looks a bit sharp on the hind leg closest to us. -- 09:23, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 11:18, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Also, lighten and saturate this to match the kittypet and main queen. 11:19, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Bah, I'm withdrawing. I don't have the patience for cream cats and I'll just end up destroying the computer. Skt Spoilers... 23:05, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Rockshade (Ki) - Tweaked
Redid the shading. I still feel like it needs to be blurred though. e.e The latest OA was Cinder. Comments? 08:21, 20, 06, 2012

Lighten it just a tad, since I can't see the lineart and can you define the earpink? 20:09, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
Added teh stripes to the tail~Comments? 11:08, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the stripes? They make the tail look purple. Skt Spoilers... 12:51, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) - Tweaked
OA was Wildfire and he needed to be shaggy. I know, it doesn't match exactly to his other images but cat's shaggy fur can look different depending on the situation, and I think it looks cool. However, I can change it if I absolutely must. 15:27, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

This looks Really good, But I suggest maybe adding some more fur around the tail, and maybe his shoulder? Just my opinion. -- 09:27, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Dawn River (SC) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow and she needed her shading defined and demensionalized and her markings needed to look less like a texture (btw I actually found the exact texture in GIMP). If you want, I could add a few patches but that would require the tweaking of her queen, too, so I'd rather not. 16:02, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make her shading a bit less red? 23:33 Wed Jun 20

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular so that it looks more natural. 01:16, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine.

While this is up, it needs another color added to it. Whether it be white on the chest or something, or another shade of brown/ginger on the pelt, it needs one more to be a real tortie. A tortie is 3 colors, this is only 2. 03:32, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, If its okay I'm suggesting this, since this is up, maybe add some depth to the eyes? -- 09:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Fuzz (KP) - Redone
Multiple issues that I can't remember. OA was Evanphoto. 19:44, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his haunch --<span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   20:02, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 20:15, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a touch and, this is just a style preference, maybe make the tail plume a bit more like Feathertail's; it looks a bit wiry to me. 21:41, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Personally, I'd rather leave the tail as is. If anyone else wants me to change it, I will. 01:07, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think the tail is fine. It looks more natural this way, in my opinion. 01:17, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (W) ~ Redone
Redone for overblurrredness, shading, and pattern in general. OA was me. I'm not very happy with it still but oh well  Skt Spoilers... 00:52, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the brown patches so they're not so hard-edged. 00:56, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt Spoilers... 01:03, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Oooh gorgeous. Any chance of you getting rid of the white patch on the head though? It seems.... out of place. Don't have to, just my opinion. 11:21, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'd really rather not, cause I based most of it off a real cat. But if others agree, I shall. Skt Spoilers... 13:05, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Changed my mind...I'll get rid of it when I can. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 15:38, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Specklestream, and all I did was add another layer of shading to it. I kinda wanted to redo it, since the mottles are difficult to see, but, that's just a personal preference, and I won't do it unless others agree.

I think it's okay just for it to be tweaked. Can you make the earpink look less magenta? 16:33, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Woo, no more weird pink-purple ear pink. 8D

Sasha (KP) - Redone
Dark muzzle, paws, and stripes needed to be removed, and she needed to be more tawny. I looked it up and this is the color of most tawny cats, so I'd rather not change it much. And I can't get the earpink any better than this, so if you want me to change it, give me a color sample. Most recent OA was Leafstrike. Comments? 10:56, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and neck shading a tad. By Sithis she's sexy  <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... ,

...Why's her collar skinnier? 20:50, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think the collar's fine like that, actually. There's really nothing wrong with it...

Sorry, but lineart is lineart. It can't just be changed unless "unusually skinny collar" is part of her description or something. Change it back? Please don't start an argument... 22:48, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

It's skinny cause it was skinny in the manga. It's been like that for a long time and I don't intend to change it. Plus, she only had the collar for a very short period of time, it wouldn't be added to her description anyways. Description is for current things. As for Skt's comment, I'll get right on that. 00:23, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to her tail. Comments? 19:25, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 22:36, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) ~ Redone
All of the colors come right from the xcf of the kittypet. However, since Paleh and I shade differently, it doesn't look exactly the same. OA was Fallow. 8D

Echosong (MC) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked shading and colors, OA was me. Everything is exactly the same as the warrior so... 01:56 Fri Jun 22

Teller of the Pointed Stones (Ancient) (H) ~ Tweaked
I swear this is tweaked xD Needed it's shading defined, I also changed the eyes to make them darker. OA was Mossy. Comments? 01:59 Fri Jun 22

Lighten and blur the shading. 02:02, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes might not be showing. 02:46 Fri Jun 22

Dapplenose (E) - Redone
Redone to match other images. Comments? 02:09, June 22, 2012 (UTC)