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Fernstripe (W) ~ CBA
This is ugly 22:06, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

Nonsense, this is beautiful! Define the tail shading and expand the shading on the hind leg a little? Maybe add a few more stripes to the neck too. 22:15, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

Lol, patch- I was commenting while you were. Anyways, this is bootiful!! Expand the neck shading some and add some more stripes on the end leg area? I don't know if it's me, but I can't seem to see the pupil? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 22:17, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think you could add some more stripes (especially in that blank area), because there seems to be more of them of her other images

Also, this is pretty minor, but I think the stripes are a bit thicker on the upper part of the tail (towards the tip) on the apprentice image than this one. 19:05, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate smudged shading. 21:26, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add some more stripes to the booty? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 04:14, April 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:37, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 21:39, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

Needletail (Unknown) - For Approval
I'll mess with the shading now. 13:59 Sun Apr 22

Define the ear pink? If you can't, that's fine. Also, this is an interesting source.... are you going to make one for the shading tutorial? =P If you're busy, that's cool w/ me. Wasn't quite sure how this blank should be shaded.

Extend the shading on some. I can do a tutorial tomorrow once I get back from a Florida. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 14:04, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Idk how I feel about this source lol 14:08 Sun Apr 22

Reuploaded I tweaked the texture and shading a bit 15:00 Sun Apr 22

Could you smooth out the shading? And add some lighter texture to it too and expand the tail shading? This is lovely! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 15:04, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, the way Sun has the texture is how I did it on the apprentice, I do believe.

Reuploaded Fixed lol. I'm shocked I haven't murdered my smudge tool by now lol 15:15 Sun Apr 22

Smooth out the hind leg shading along the base of the tail. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 18:53, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Beenose (Unknown) - CBA
I love Beenose, but not the shading on this. <span style="">15:02, 4/22/2018

Desaturate the shading a little bit? <span style="">15:04 Sun Apr 22

You forgot to add some shading to the pure white spot on her chest. I also think the texture is more rough? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:05, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like it better now. :3 <span style="">16:58, 4/22/2018

Smooth the shading on the tail, belly and hind leg. 18:48, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

On the back as well. Also, there's an unfilled pixel (probably missing some shading) at the ---> end of the back shading. At one of the tips of the fur. 18:51, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Add a little bit of light on the tip of the tail, and maybe lighten the shading a very tiny bit

Re-uploaded. <span style="">19:56, 4/22/2018

I don't know if it's me- but I think there's shading leaking <-- arm by the chest? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:13, April 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">15:19, 4/23/2018

Smooth the shading on the <- front leg a little bit. 20:33, April 23, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the tail shading a little more^^

I think there's shading leaking on the <-- shoulder. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 09:11, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">14:54, 4/24/2018

CBA? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#Litten 03:32, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Spikefur (Unknown) ~ CBA
I like his base color okay. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">15:23, 4/22/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​ I think the tufted fur should stick up and show more on the head and cheeks, like the other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:28, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Because of where the whiskers are, doing the top of the head itself isn't really all that possible for me. I made an attempt, though. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">16:13, 4/22/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

I think the shading is leaking from the ear lineart. In the <--- ear 18:52, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

I can give you the file without the whiskers? Also, in that --> ear, I don't see the lines for the inner ear? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:11, April 23, 2018 (UTC)


 * Wait, I lied, it's there- you just didn't color the ear pink all the way. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:13, April 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">20:40, 4/23/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

per Vec's last comment, there's still a tiny little bit of shading leaking from the lineart on the < ear.. I know this is like super nitpicky rip

Re-uploaded. Couldn't find it the first time, hence why I didn't do anything about it. Thanks for the screenshot. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">20:57, 4/23/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

Do you need the file without whiskers? Also can you smooth out the back shading near the middle back a bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 09:10, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Honestly, no. It seems fine as it is. There aren't a lot of spikes on his other images, so I shouldn't have to add a bunch on this one. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">15:31, 4/24/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

CBA? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#Litten 03:32, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Shellpaw (A) - For Approval


Could you define the eye depth a little bit? It could just be me idk :P 20:31, April 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Define it some more on the side, as it looks rather flat there. 21:12, April 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Can you smooth out the shading a tad and maybe add some lighting to --> ear? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 09:11, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded didn't add any light to the ear though, because imo it'd contradict the source, and I've used this one before

smooth out the haunch shading more and here are eye colors if you need them: 1e468f, 3273ea, and 4982ea. (they look gray to me, but that could be my screen) I spy with my little eye a tint that looks suspiciously like the on on Shellpaw's kit jk  <00:34, 4/25/2018> ​

Reuploaded ty for the colors^^ and yeah lol I copied the tint as close as I could

Maybe define the shading depth a little on the belly area. 01:04, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded nabbed some waste as well

Smooth out the shading on the closest hind leg. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#Litten 03:33, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Ivypool (Q) ~ For Approval
Cool mom Ivy. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 12:32, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

I know she looks grey- it may be the shading. I'll smooth out the shading later and define it on the tail. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 12:38, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

I can barely make out her pupils, and the eye color looks more of a dark gray. <span style="">14:55, 4/24/2018

I color picked it from her other images. The eye color needs to be changed to dark blue. Do I have persmission? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#Litten 15:10, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

Her eyes are dark blue on her other images. There is no need to change them. (I just checked myself)  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">15:27, 4/24/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

The nick at the top of <-- ear seems to cut off the back. <span style="">15:43, 4/24/2018

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#Litten 03:29, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Lioneye (Unknown) ~ For Approval
this is ugly <00:59, 4/25/2018> ​

No, this is actually quite pretty! Smooth out the shading a little overall, though. 01:03, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes <span style="">01:08 Wed Apr 25

Define the eye depth and expand the shading on the back on the base of the tail. Also, in --> ear, the ear pink needs to be extended. You have it all the way to the whiskers. I also think the eye postition forr --> side is a little off. Maybe make it more to the left. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#Litten 03:31, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Unknown) ~ For Approval
i was going to put that this was really fun but i realised every single error with it as i hit upload so i'll fix the <<< front paw waste next upload --

Re-uploaded. --