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Mitzi(KP)~ For Approval
Ive had this for a bit, I was just waiting for Dawncloud to be done! ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:26, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is great! But could you define light on the collar as it's dark and sort of hard to see, whiten the white except for the face as it looks rather gray and add a bit of the base above the nose and between the eyes? Since she has a manga image and it has that bit of the base in the place it'd probably be good to have it here. You're getting good! SquidwardPlays 18:35, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Also, waste at base of the tail, both hindpaws, the outstretched forepaw, muzzle and both ears. I can't send screens in but if nobody else does I can later SquidwardPlays 18:37, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I dont see waste, and on my first upload, there wil ost likely be no waste. I do a waste check evry time, and I make absolute shure evry 3 times. ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:46, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

[https://imgur.com/a/PJ38A8Q%7CHere's reference for the waste. It is there.] SquidwardPlays 19:03, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add another layer of shading to add some depth to the image? Very nice job Owl 19:10, 02/5/2019

Oh and as beautiful as this collar is, it has to match File:Mitzi.RP.png her manga collar. pls use this collar for another kittypet I love it so much 19:24, 02/5/2019

Re-up, Rip collar. ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:45, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I liked the collar too, oh well. But the white hasn't been whitened at all. It's still very gray. Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:46, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

The waste at the base of the tail is still there, btw, just checked. https://imgur.com/a/u4SZlQC <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, it is the shading making the white look gray. now I get the pain of white cats. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:01, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Looking good ^^. but don't forget to extend the stripe of the base on the face to reach the muzzle, there is on the queen you're matching. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:04, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

oh, you before said to have the base color between the eyes, but I set my base color to the white... oops! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:11, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

That's my bad then, I worded it wrongly. I was refrring to the red color as the base not thinking about what you might've used for the base. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:13, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, its okay. We all do that sometimes! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:15, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Patches are a bit overblurred, compared to the alt queen in the set

I agree, the patches should be more rough and three toned. The colors don't seem to match the image that was pointed out. 20:58, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is great Owlbite, but the pupils are brown, make them black or white (your choice dear friend), and define the light on the collar, and yes there's some waste outside the top of the collar, and unfilled pixels near the latter, still this is good dear friendPotato=) (talk) 22:56, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

what unfilled pixels? and the puipls are artists choice, I vave had them on all my art. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Between the collar and ear, do you want a screenie?Potato=) (talk) 00:10, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

I see them, they are not unfilled pixels. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:23, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Would you like an unshaded screenshot of Mitzi's old image? I made it and would happily provide you with the correct colors should you need them. ​​​​​

yes please. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 01:48, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go. I realize the ear pink is hard to see, so the hex color for that is #EC7676. ​​​​

Re-up, this is cute! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:49, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

maybe sharpen the shading on the face just a smidge? this is adorable owl! 08:36 Wed Feb 6 2019

Re-up, the face is gray!!! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 17:12, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the face is no longer so gray. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:22, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Face should be whitened a bit, pupils are still brown, and the nosepink should match the color of the earpink, paw pads, and tonguePotato=) (talk) 22:55, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Tongue doesn’t have to match. I have a black cat and his tongue is super pink, and his paw pads, nose, and ears are black. So nosepink is fine <span style="">23:03, 02/6/2019

I never match my nosepink to my earpink or anything like that, I don't think it's necessary. — ♡ <span style title="If you can believe,">you're such  <span style="style" title="you&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' re such a dream to me." data-rte-attribs=" style title=you're such a dream to me."&gt;a dream to me. 23:43, 2/06/2019 ​

like I said before, the eye is artists choice, and it is in all my work. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:03, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on both of the back feet and the shading in the ear. Define the lightsource on the center of the body too maybe? I'm having trouble judging where it is coming from, might just be me though so a second opinion here would be good. Smooth out the shading on the belly/flank. 01:20, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I just re-did the shading, I didnt realy like it before, and i think it is sort of cute now! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:27, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Whiten the paws again, the tinted shading looks much nicer! <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:49, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Derfine light on the ear furthest from us? this is cute! --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    12:58, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Colors are off from the alt. queen - the darker brown is noticeably lighter on this in comparison. If it's due to highlights or whatnot, shrink those some to allow for the base to show

sorry if I cant re-up for a bit, I lost the pen tip for my drawing tablet pen, and i cant find the replacements. (dont ask how I manage to do that.) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 05:40, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, when I could draw aigain, a cryed of joy! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:40, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paw closest to us, along with both back paws, it looks like there's a layer of shading over them. Define the shading depth on the arm closest to us and smooth the edges of the overall shading so it appears more gradient. 18:04, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I hope this is good. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Light should be defined more on the legs, they needn't be covered in shadow.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:24, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, adding more light is hard, so sorry if it dosnt show up. If i add much more, it will end up looking white. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:01, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Mitzi (KP).kittypet.png, not what you currently have, Owl. The template won't work if the file names aren't what we have. ​​​

Did it, and Ill re-up for waste soon, even tho I just made sure there was no waste... somehow it got through. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, IDK what happened, but in the art thee wasnt waste, butn this it said there was. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 06:07, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Add light on the paws; they look almost solidly purple, and the difference between shaded/unshaded areas should be more visible

Re-up, this is the best you will get. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:11, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

There's no differences between the last two uploads. Did you perhaps grab the wrong save to upload or whatnot?

Re-up, yes I did. wow. Noe it is better tho! <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 21:05, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite, though the tongue needs some shading, and out of my interest is the paw pad closest to the tongue filled in?--Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:13, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

It is filled in. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:55, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, good now. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 02:58, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

The belly white should be smudged more roughly, out of interest to matching the queen

the white is the base color, how should i do that to the brown part? <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:28, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the brown sharply then, to get the same effect to the eye^^

Re-up, this looks better now! <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:57, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

either define or add the pale brown parts on her front legs 04:20 Thu Feb 14 2019

Re-up, should I put more shading on the lighter parts? <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:30, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

Pad color is leaking on the outstretched front leg 18:52, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

no, it is just the shading tint. ✬ Love is Love forever! ✬ 20:57, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be defined everywhere. 21:00, February 16, 2019 (UTC) Do you have the shading on a different layer? It should also be on one side of the leg and not covering the whole leg. This is marvelous.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 04:01, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I re-did the shading. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  19:26, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the legs and tail. Her front paws are also looking gray, whiten them. 19:45, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I can either have white paws or define the shading, not both. it might be do-able, but it will be very hard. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  20:05, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

It's very possible to do both. Put shading on the bottom of the paws, then make the tops, where light will be hitting it, whiter. The front paws, and the front leg furthest from us need more depth defined. They need to be whitened more too, particularly the paw closest to us. Whiten the back paw closest to us as well. Could you define the lightsource on the body more? I'm having trouble pinpointing where it's coming from. 20:15, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Also, the tail white needs to go further down, this needs to match her queen image.

Try using highlights if you don't use them already. It's optional, but it helps to brighten the image up.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:20, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

I bring a spark of knowledge, if this hasn't been said before. Put the white shading on a separate layer, that way you can toggle the shading opacity without affecting the rest of the shading. If you smudge/blur the shading just right, you'll get a seamless transition from darker shading to lighter shading. Ask me if this isn't clear.

Re-up, I just re-did all of it. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  02:36, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Much, Much, MUCH better! You're doing a great job Owl! The only thing I see is that the paw pads, earpink, and tongue need to be a bit more pink, since purple is sort of a unnatural color.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:02, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

The white still needs to be defined on the paws and tail. Try erasing some of the shading there, that will probably help. 03:47, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

the paw-pads are pink, not purple. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:29, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the darker patches, as they do not match her queen. They should also match her son, Fritz. --Potato&#61;) (talk) 21:46, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

the Fritz image is ment to mach mine, because i got mine up first, and they are the right color. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  05:32, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

You are both supposed to match this image, and Ari has the correct patch placement on the KP image they have up right now.

Tone down the tint

I dont get how my patch placement is off, and I got the color from the original Mitzi kittypet with no shading. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:43, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, for what I understand. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:47, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Could you brighten the paws to be white. They look cream rn 08:52, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the dark patches again. Owl, you may want to move your sig to a template as it takes up a lot of space on the source editor.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 14:05, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Make the belly patch skinner. Also I can always send your Fritz’s file if you needn’t it. ^^ 14:13, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and the light on the legs and tail. 14:56, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-done, ill fix the white soon. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  03:29, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, ugly? Okay? I never knew it was possible to do both! But somehow I did! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  03:35, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define your lightsource and lighten the dark patches. Make a smooth transition between them, you were looking at Ari's shading style, which is rough. Brighten up the white.-- 14:04, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I don't really get what you mean, but I re-did the shading. And I am not changing the color, I have the right colors, I am not changing them. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:59, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some shading on the white?

The patches seem a bit overblurred compared to the queen. 09:21, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the pupil in the eye farthest from us. It may be hard, but just draw a thin line for a pupil and it should look better.-- 16:48, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Whiten her white parts more. Might be my eyes, but the darker patches look like a slightly different color than that of her queen? The earink also needs to be lightened. The paler of the color on the hindleg is too dark compared to the queen as well. 15:38, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading? Whiskii ✿ 14:00, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Another option to brighten the white is to use pure white. Also, there are light pixels above > this eye. Is that supposed to be there?-- 22:43, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, Owl?

Re-up,yeah, I am still working. Working my life away trying to find time to re-up this and not fail at life. Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  02:07, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. Remember, ''keep it on one side of the character. That will make the paws less gray. Also, smooth out the transition between the patches, as it isn't meant to be so rough.''-- 02:31, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I recommend you look at the queen image again, it is if anything, rougher. Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  03:32, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Huge, huge improvement. CBA?

I'm sorry but I think some more of the brighter brown should be addes to match the queen. This still seems overblurred compared to her other image. 08:41, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, thank you Fox! I thought it was sort of overblured, but I was told to sharpen it, so I didn't know what to do! Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  21:22, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

They are still overblurred. Try setting the sharpening tool with a hard-edged brush at a high rate with a high opacity to match the queen. Still, a great job!-- 22:35, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

The colors don't seem to match the queens very much, they aren't as bright. 08:32, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

she does not look brown and white i see pink and brown --Willowstep21 (talk) 17:18, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

There's is no pink. I'm not sure whats wrong with your screen but on mine theres's definitely no pink. -- 03:43, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed with Silver.-- 14:44, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i dont know what you all see, but i have 3 secreens I use, the family computer, my computer, and my tablet. I see pink on all 3 of them. what device screen are you looking on? knowing that might help. Axolotls are my children!  00:57, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

The lighter patch on the hindleg is still too dark compared with the rest, the earpink is also too dark compared to the queens, although that is probably shading. Even so, could you remove some of that? The pattern is overblurred as well. There also appears to be a lighter stripe between two of the patches? Whatever it is, it looks out of place and should probably be fixed. 15:41, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Draw a pupil in the eye farthest from us, and there are lighter pixels above that eye too.-- 16:16, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Potato. Sorry if I didnt make this clear, and it sounds like I just expect you to know things, because I relise that is what I am sounding like, but if I re-up, and didnt change something, it means I want it to be said/confirmed by another person, so I will not change the eye untel then. the white above the eye is ment to be there, the brown dosnt take up half the face, so there would be white there. Patch, the line is part of shading the leg is shading, and i will fix it; i know the pattern is overblured, please dont repeat Potato's first comment, and the shading color dosnt need to be perfect, shading can lter things a little, like the earpink color. And sorry if I cant re-up for a while, my like has been sort of s*** reacently. (let me know if that is to close to swearing for the wiki!) Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  20:24, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I apologize, I didn't see Potato's comment. I also never said you had to alter the color of the shading. I told you to remove some of it from the ear/define the earpink, unless that was directed to someone else's comment ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 22:31, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Agreeing late to Axos' comment, I use a windows 10 asus laptop. i dont have any light changes and there is no pink at all. I'm not sure what you see, but it's definitely not pink. I'm sorry if it seems like im attacking you, but there is absolutely no pink there.-- 09:40, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be declined due to the one month limit?-- 13:59, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Stonestar (Le)~For Approval
Don't tell me my art looks like Owl's because they showed me how to do cat art, so I adapted to their style, and first- first cat art I have ''posted! ''Axolotls are fudge (talk) 19:59, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Please recede the shading. It it making him dark. Ax, you did a great job on this, but just fix up the shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:02, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the deputy image, which means the eye color and base color need to be altered

Could you also expand the pupil? It's very hard to see. 20:30, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I can't tell if the shading is good. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 00:49, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

this is nice for your first! blur the edges of the shading to smooth it out 01:09, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

The pupils are overblurred, please sharpen them. The earpink could use a lot of definition, and adding on to Burnt's comment, I think the shading should be lightened 5-6 ticks on the opacity bar.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:43, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the pupils are not blurred at all, they never were, but I hope this helps! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 02:39, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Err.. it doesn't appear you changed anything. Did you upload the right file? If not feel free to slap me.Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:04, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws, muzzle and I'd suggest removing a bit from the top of the head the left side of the neck and a little on the chest too. Add a white dot of light in his eyes. 04:00, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

I see a difference, the eye changed, and the earpink on the → ear is different. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:35, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Add some eye white. And the eyes do look really blurry, perhaps sharpen the color.

Patch already mentioned the white! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:58, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't notice.

There is also some shading leaking away from the lineart by the --> front leg. 15:57, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Add more light to the right ear? (Also, the comment you added at first is very, very unnecessary.)--<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 13:10, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

I dont get what you mean by the comment I added first. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 20:23, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

your comment when you first posted this, and i agree it was unnecessary

what does that has to do with the art? Why did that need to be pointed out? Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  22:11, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

"Don't tell me my art looks like Owl's because they showed me how to do cat art" This is what they are talking about. This can come off as rude to others. Anyways, define the earpink in > this ear.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:00, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, OWO that was ment to be a joke! Sorry! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:38, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please lighten the shading another 5 ticks on the opacity bar (or however what program allows you to adjust shading.) The pupils are overblurred, maybe try the sharpen tool at a rate of 6 or seven with a medium brush. And I cannot make out any earpink, darken it a few ticks.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:33, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, it is hard to sharpen things that were never blurred, but I just re-did the eyes. and the ear pink, cannot be made any more visible now. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 02:43, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

lessen the shading on the ear, that might be the problem

Define the eye depth, there's waste near the --> ear and <--- paws (blue), and leaking shading on the belly, <--- foreleg, <--- haunch and base of the tail (red) 23:24, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading depth and smooth out the shading? 00:21, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-done, I didn't like it before, and it was hard to do with like... 20 almost useless layers, I'll lighten it up though! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:01, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, lightened by a bit. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:03, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking away from the base of the tail, and on the blanks right haunch and foreleg. 14:13, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also be smoothed out a little more on the right haunch. 01:01, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

the left haunch's shading is leaking a lil by the paw  Whiskii  ✿ 14:05, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Expanding on to Ivybreeze's comment, the shading could be smoothed everywhere. 23:04, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, can I do shading on this that I like? I dont think so! Axolotls are my children!  01:57, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 02:36, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, especially around the muzzle and forehead 08:28, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the eye color a bit more vibrant looks glazedWillowstep21 (talk) 20:37, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I like the eyes a little better now. program crashed, so it might have lost some of my work. Axolotls are my children!  21:38, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

The nose looks unfilled, and the eyes still look blurry. Perhaps add a definite gradient with a defined light source?

Might erase some shading on the <- side of the <- front leg. Otherwise, this is looking great Ax! <span style="">1:39 Mon Mar 4 2019

While you still have plenty of time, are you still working? 02:27, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Shnuky (KP) ~ For Approval
blurred shading is hard wth

Shunky is mentioned to be dark, and this is rather light...Potato&#61;) (talk) 14:12, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

...this was the color i put when i was tweaking this and no one said anything when i tweaked it? I'll darken it if you want but ???

i kind of agree with potato that it should be darkened– she does look more neutral to me 14:35, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

i thought shnulkyś collar was black--Willowstep21 (talk) 20:31, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

We cannot tell precisely if her collar is black, but it has to match what it looks like in TaS. So, the flower ribbon has to be removed. Shnuky is not seen on the cover, which doesn't confirm her collar color unlike Sasha's collar. Judging from the picture, it looks dark, so the collar has to be dark.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:06, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

but shouldnt the collar match the manga image Willowstep21 (talk) 19:53, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Willowstep, that's what I was talking about up there.^^Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:44, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

i'll need a picture of her so i know what to put

Here you go!Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:34, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Also, fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue and the shading tint is making her look green.. so maybe change the tint to a blue or purple?Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:54, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading tint is artist's choice, Star does not have to change it if she doesn't want to. ​​​​​

will upload after this but a, i'm not changing the tint, and b, is that even a paw pad? might be something else

aight so i was doing stuff and that image you linked potato? that doesn't seem dark, seems more neutral. i will change the collar but the base color i am not sure about.

Hmm perhaps color pick the image’s base? Also the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the shoulder^^ Ik shading tint is artists choice but it really clashes with the earpink in particular, could you dull it just on that perhaps?

re-up your wish is my command

could you define the depth? love the shading color 00:38, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The pink is leaking from the paw pads on the back paws -- 20:11, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

can you define either the shading or light on the collar? its just flat rn I need to try green shading   <span style="">17:33, 02/23/2019

Still working?

re-up

eggheart i don't see any leaking pink can you point it out?

If you zoom in on > this leg, it is leaking. Fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue. 04:26, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

will reup later, but potato are you sure that is a paw pad? for all we know that could be a dew claw. I want a second opinion because rn i'm not sure what that is.

i think its supposed to be the dewclaw <span style="">10:47, 2/28/2019

think what egg meant by leaking pink was that there would be some parts not filled in all the way on the back paws, the spaces between the pawpaws, but they're all pink here

re-up ya girl did a dumb

CBA?

it brings me pain to break CBA, but I think there is some leaking shading(blue), pad pink out of the pad(red)here you go. and the pad closest to the toung, everyone else had to fill in, and I think it should be fair you should too, and while you are at it, could you fill in the nose? Could you lastly, define the shading on the toung? Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  20:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Snowdrop (Kittypet) - For Approval
i like to shade white cats <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:35, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Very pretty! :D Can you define the light on ---> ear? 20:40, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:45, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

add shading depth?

Still working? 23:36, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, I'm gonna re-up tonight <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups an attempt was made <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Where is your light source? <span style="">1:37 Mon Mar 4 2019

Looks like its coming from --> side Malina457 (talk) 02:04, March 5, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Waspwhisker (Kittypet) - For Approval
his name is cool <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:39, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Would the scar be showing at this angle? 22:47, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think his kittypet image is supposed to get the scar, or does it? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:38, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

It would probably show a little on his belly, judging by the deputy. 01:06, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Doesn't he get the scar after he joins SkyClan? I know it would be visible, but I won't add it unless someone can tell me he had his scar while he was a kittypet, Sorry Potato. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:43, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

oh my, I totally forgot he was a KP before joining. Okay then, don't add it bc *facepaw* I'm dumb. Shading could be smoothed on the belly and collar. 02:39, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

awwwww, pink kittypet :3 Willowstep21 (talk) 13:48, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Please do not comment unless you have a critique; it clogs up the page. ^^ 14:10, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:09, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reups this as smooth as i can get it <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:23, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm could you make the transitions from gray to white match moreso what is on the deputy? Here, they seem more "smudgey" for lack of better words, where on the other they are smudged, but not so back and forth and less transition space

Old warrior/deputy smudge effect was achieved by making the pattern with a hard edge and smudging with a 1 px brush. <span style="">1:36 Mon Mar 4 2019

Myler (KP) ~ For Approval
Based him off my own pretty kitty :) and Spooky told me to add a bowtie so I hope that worked out 00:46, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading and define it on the white please 06:58, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The paw pads are also multicolored, when they should be just one. 15:05, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Not necessarily, paw pads are artists choice Malina457 (talk) 15:35, March 2, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded Think I fixed shading, and BTW I based the pawpads off my kitty :) 04:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading slightly on the collar? 04:31, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading on the flank a bit. 01:23, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Frecklewish (SC) (alt kp.) - CBA
nice eyeliner 13:13, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading please? I can't really see it. 13:21, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 13:33, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

in the manga her spots are bigger Willowstep21 (talk) 13:38, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

They are also more round in the manga as well Malina457 (talk) 15:31, March 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

this follows after the mc which was the first in set? --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 16:35, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

yep, i followed the mc. 19:10, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The spots on the mc seem more rounded and it appears to have a bit of light texture. Also could you define the shading some more, its still hard to tell where its at. Could you possible expand it a bit too? 19:15, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 20:38, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

so so sorry ari, but i do believe the shading could be smoothed out slightly. 03:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

The spots look smoother on the MC too

what do you mean by smoother? 15:36, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Less rough. Try blurring/smudging them. 16:11, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

If this is the alt I'm thinking of, it needs to match what's shown in the graphic novel, which has them as fairly rough spots. To smudge or blur them would probably deviate from the pattern, so I'd be careful as to how much you blur them, if at all.

reuploaded 00:39, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Stagleap (TR) (Alt. Star) - Declined
Comments? 00:56, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

.. he's not cited to be in StarClan..? 01:03, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

If this stays up, smooth out the shading. 01:23, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

He does, if you look at his page

The family tree doesn't confirm him to be in StarClan... it doesn't say anywhere he is in StarClan. 01:42, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

There're categories on the top of the tree, one of which is StarClan. If you click on that, Stagleap is included, therefore confirming that he's in StarClan.

Ahh. Redclaw should have his Star put back up as well, because Brackenwing is listed and the mate heart, but his icon is cut off.. wow. 02:47, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Wait.. I'm not finding it. Are you sure this isn't the Stagleap from GC? 02:56, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading some? I realize thisis a discussion on wether he's in starclan but could we possibly lessen it unless its commemts to the art, I believe that would go to the PCA talk if theres confusion. 12:33, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:41, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

I did check for the cite of this Stagleap's being shown as gray however its not the right one. It's ThunderClan's thats shown as gray so I believe this would not be valid. 17:48, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

There are two Stagleaps shown on the family tree: the one in Tallstar's Revenge who is the father of Onestar, and the one in Goosefeather's Curse who is the father of One-Eye and Speckletail. TR's Stagleap is a dark brown tom but is shown as a gray warrior and not in StarClan. GC's Stagleap is a gray tabby tom but is shown as a gray StarClan cat. This could easily be switched to be the GC Stagleap, as this would still apply. I'd think the blank would have to be long-haired though. 23:32, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Are you sure GC's would get it? From my understanding that would be a partial. 23:37, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Nope. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ TR Stagleap was most likely gray prior to the update and kicked out of StarClan. If not, there are light color starclan cats this could also work for. 23:45, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Ah okay, was primarily asking as I thought Gray tabbues listed as a solid gray was partial but I could be wrong. 00:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Given that Stagleap from WindClan isn't shown in StarClan, this will have to be declined based on that... but I think it can always be re-purposed and reposted with something else, if you want. As of current, this is declined due to no citation for Stagleap's residence in StarClan.

Elder blanks - For Approval
aaa ty all so much!!!! Whiskii ✿ 02:49, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe that the heads are just very slightly too big (from reference images, it seems like a cats body is around 2 (2/3) heads) 03:02, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the nose bridge a bit - like this. 12:22, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. with the way the <-- whiskera are pointed would the --> left ones show? I adore these 12:30, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Might be my personal problem but could you make the smile a little less connected to the whiskers/less...noticeable? I love a smile and a small one is cute but this one seems overly large for a cat. Idk. These are really good though! 19:39, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with what winter said about the smile– i also think it would be more in character if it were lessened 03:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hows this look? blanks are hard!! Whiskii ✿

hm, it still looks as though the whiskers/mouth are touching maybe curve the mouth down a tad instead of up? 15:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Are changes showing?

last nitpick– the long hair tail's seems to lie unnaturally flat, could you maybe add more fur lines there? i love these so much 15:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is optional; but maybe since they are elders add little lines under their eyes to make them seem older?

15:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mind checking for a few darker gray lineart pixels that aren't quite black? There's a few scattered around on it

i think wiki's having a problem rn or somethin because the changes arent showing, ill get to theother comments in a sec  Whiskii  ✿ 16:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded are the changes finally showing? also i tried putting a line under their eyes but it blended too much with the whiskers. i may still add it if you really want to  Whiskii  ✿ 17:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the blanks could benefit from a line under the eyes - just to make them look older. 18:07, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I also just wanted to point out the longhair's tail is like that because its supposed to be flat on the ground ^-^  Whiskii  ✿ 18:40, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I mean they look fine without the line imo 20:27, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed; the line might make it too crowded. 22:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tried something out, thoughts? Whiskii ✿ 22:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I think these look great! 02:25, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Personally I think the lines around the eyes (both on the left side and near the snout) should be removed. Cats don't really have any sort of creasing in those two spots no matter what age, so it doesn't make much sense for them to be there. The shoulders are also too defined, especially on the longhair, and the tail curve is a bit unnatural right now. Also, I don't have the time to draw a test lineart tweak to check, but have you made sure that the haunch area looks good when the tail is removed? Cause that was a slight problem on the old versions, and even on the kit blanks I had to completely redo the haunch after I realized it looked weird when they were used for a short-tailed/tailless character. If you've already checked and made sure it looks fine like that, you can ignore this bit of the comment.

reuploaded removed the eye lines, made the shorthair's tail better, kept the longhair's tail as is, because i cant really do much else with it, removed most of the shoulder line. also the haunch area looks fine when tail is removed, you just have to draw it in correctly  Whiskii  ✿

changes arent showing on the shorthair :(  Whiskii  ✿

PoT-6 Blue long-furred kittypet ~ CBA
idk if i named it correctly--<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 03:37, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and expand it on the tail

Could ypu expand the haunch and front body shading too? 12:30, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

reups --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 04:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth it out more? and add more tail shading <-

reups --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 09:06, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

reups again  --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 09:11, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

With your source, I think the tail shading should be switched to the other side. Also, if you could smooth out the shading outlined in green, I think this'll be all set to go. ​

Reups --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 07:05, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:29, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Black and white kittypet- For Evaluation
Not sure how I feel about this.. also I know about the thumb thing yet I can't remove it.. help?-- 01:53, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

there is waste all around the image, thr shading is leakinf all around and It could also be expanded. It also appears that the earpink on the ear is leaking away from the linearrt. Th black patch on the tail could also be softnened. Malina457 (talk) 04:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

I know.. let me see what I can do with Photoshop, mystery person. 02:00, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

are you using layers? because ive noticed that the black patches are leaking from the linear art. try putting the linear art on another layer and leaving the black on the layer below. 02:50, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Yep, I do use layers. Do you want me to set them to multiply? 03:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

no, you dont need to set it to multiply. for the waste, tbh just go to the appropriate layer and erase it. also, i recommend using a 10 px smudge tool on 40% strength to smooth out the shading. 03:20, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ugh I'll mess with it later. 03:23, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

like basically apply the smudge tool for the edges of the shading by moving it in a motion perpendicular to the shading edges (ok that sounds. extremely like flux and gauss's law ew). i find this easier than the blur tool, which generally sucks 03:22, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Coukd you smooth the shading and it expand it. Could you also darken the earpink a tad, it seems really neon. 03:29, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the shoulder, chest, and stomach. 04:33, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded did I upload the right file? 04:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

there is stil waste Malina457 (talk) 04:47, March 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

Ack, whenever I overwrite the existing filename, no changes show... 05:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Wait I may have figured it out.. 05:04, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded yes there we go. Better? 05:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again more things, will get the waste in a second. Suggestions? 05:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

the shading needs smoothing out in general– namely on the shoulder. also, could you tone down the color of the paw pads? its slightly neon. 05:25, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ye I'll get to that 05:30, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo it tomorrow, since I don't like how it currently is. I also lost all my layers, which is another reason I'm redoing it. 05:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes are not showing. I tinted the shading and I'm well aware it needs to be smoothed out. Also there is waste outside the tail, but I can't erase it due to the way Photoshop crops the image. 16:10, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Wait they are popping up but this is still showing.. help? 16:24, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Look here for changes. 17:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

it’s showing up now i think. anyways, there is a lot of waste by the tail, there needs to be more shading where the front leg and stomach meet. Also can you smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us and darken it a bit, it looks a bit too purple to be shading.

17:48, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

It's not showing up for me. Ari, I can't kill the waste due to the way Photoshop displays the image, but I can try with magic powers. I knew the shading had to be smoothed a bit.. let me do that. 19:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded tried fixing things, will kill that waste. 19:52, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

KERBLAM yay changes are showing. This better? Also, Photoshop let me kill the waste *happy dance*! 19:56, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twas more played with far front leg shading. Smudging is fun. 20:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

More wasted has been killed  20:10, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the tint of the shading, or perhaps put it into multiply? 20:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded did both. Better? 21:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Minor Tweaks  22:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

this is looking better! could you darken the shading so that it looks less saturated? 22:53, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is getting better! I think colour on the pawpads and ears are leaking away from the lineart though? 22:56, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded that's just lighter pink Finches. I will get to the shading now. 00:26, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:34, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, and smooth out the shading everywhere.

darken the shading tint a lil- it still looks neon 08:42, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

looks very flat  define shading?Willowstep21 (talk) 20:16, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:23, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears neon, could you make it a bit less saturated? Define the lightsource as well. 00:30, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm.. the light is coming from the right, so some shading will have to be swapped I guess. Will desaturate shading now. 00:36, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you also blur the shading in the ear a little bit? <span style="">00:38 Tue Mar 5

Reuploaded redid the shading to fit lightsource, also desaturated it. Better? 00:53, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Also, the shading looks blocky, any Photoshop advice on how to fix that? 00:57, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Use the blur tool at about, I'd say maybe 50%, and go around the edges of your shading and see what it does. I use CS5, and the tools are a lot more powerful than GIMP or Pixlr's are. Also, you've got waste on <-- side of the tail on the outside of the lineart. ;)

Winterwhisper, was that you? I'll get on to that. 01:38, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Nope, it was me. Forgot to sign, sorry about that. ​​​​​

It didn't do much.. but I see more waste so I'll nam that 01:48, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurring did not do much. I did nab ear waste, but Jayce Photoshop will not let me kill the tail waste. I tried on two layers and it will not leave. 01:53, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Try upping the strength of the blur tool. I'm not sure about the waste issue, try deselecting before you attempt to erase.

Reuploaded set blur to 80 percent and it didn't do much. Also, I don't select anything and tail waste is still there.. suggestions? 22:38, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Waste has died  22:54, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

i still recommend the smudge tool at 10 px and 40% strength, it achieves the same effect as the blur tool  00:14, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded did not do much. Also, shading is not leaking away from the lineart on the front leg closest to us, that's just light shading. Any more suggestions? This smudge tool hates me holy shrimp 02:40, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

i HATE suggesting this, because its a rly bad method, but try gaussian blur if nothing works and set the strength to as you see fit. 14:29, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sol (L) - For Approval
<span style="">14:48 Sun Mar 3 2019

hm could you add some depth to the chest? it looks a little flat in that area. 14:54, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Pulled out a few hairs but there's not much else I can do without screwing up the light source. <span style="">15:00 Sun Mar 3 2019

Reuploaded again. wtf wikia <span style="">15:01 Sun Mar 3 2019

It's not uploading. I'll try again later I guess??<span style="">15:15 Sun Mar 3 2019

I have an idea Breezey. Try uploading the changes to VVcap, Gyazo, or Ezimba. Smooth out/lighten the shading, although this is your choice and you can always ignore me. 16:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Also, make > this ear more tufty, since it is just a little pointed. 20:11, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

can you add the eye shine please? <span style="">20:40, 3/03/2019

I think the eyes are in shadow? Malina457 (talk) 00:13, March 4, 2019 (UTC)Malina

The eye shine should still be there <span style="">00:26, 3/04/2019

I think the way the eyes are designed are artists choice as bot every one has very noticeable eye shine. 01:19, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I can't actually see any eye white/eye shine at all. It doesn't look like it's there, regardless of it being in shadow or not. ​

I intentionally didn't put eyeshine as the light source is from behind but I can if necessary. <span style="">14:12 Mon Mar 4 2019

I dont think you need to, givn the source Malina457 (talk) 22:13, March 4, 2019 (UTC)malina

I wouldn't object to her adding it, though. It's fairly misleading (or at least I think so) and it wouldn't do any harm to add it.

Whitestar (L) - CBA
20:12, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading behind the (our) right from leg on the haunch and belly. <span style="">14:11 Mon Mar 4 2019

Reuploaded. 02:11, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:30, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Runningnose (L) ~ for approval
20:37, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

(super small thing) but can you catch this bit of shading that probably shouldn't be there on the > side of the tailtip, just kinda looks like a stripe

Sandynose (KP Alt) ~ CBA
this isn't the best but here he is 22:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the lighter gray a lot. ​​

Re-Ups 13:49, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, fiddled with it a bit. 21:33, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could still be smoothed out a lot more. ​​

could you also define the shading on the inner back leg? <span style="">00:35 Tue Mar 5

Re-Ups, ive smoothed it quite a bit that's about as smoothed as I can get it without messing up the style I have. 17:19, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:32, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bob (KP) - for approval
bob's such a weird name for a cat <span style="">22:49, 3/03/2019

pretty! could you define the shading depth slightly? 22:57, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shading depth is fine. Just remove a bit of shading on the back to help your light source. <span style="">1:31 Mon Mar 4 2019

reuploaded for the changes <span style="">13:58, 3/06/2019

Volestar (L) - For Approval
aaaa <span style="">00:00 Mon Mar 4

Vole is still a funny word. Define the shading depth. 00:33, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Shading depth is fine. Not everything needs super-dramatic lighting. <span style="">1:30 Mon Mar 4 2019

I disagree. It needs a little more depth. Most other images have it. This is really good though! 02:35, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Breezey; the depth is perfectly acceptable. I'm not sure why there's such a focus on really dramatic shading depth nowadays, but this image is fine. ​​​​​

I respectfully disagree. While I can tell the shading is present, I can hardly distinguish it from the base even with my screen's brightness all the way up. I think either defining the shading or the depth would be beneficial. 13:25, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

That's kinda part of good shading though. The image looks substantial without super thick or dramatic shading. Splook's image looks plenty substantial and the shading is soft but that's fine, not every light source or environment produces dark, hard shading. <span style="">14:10 Mon Mar 4 2019

I agree with Vec, I think some shading depth should be added/defined. 14:22, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

The image doesn't look flat (except maybe on the paws), which is the entire point of shading, so I see no reason it has to be defined.

I think the shading could be defined honestly, I have 3 screens and I can't really see it on any of them Malina457 (talk) 20:05, March 4, 2019 (UTC)malina

I don't think it needs to be defined everywhere, though. The tail, face, and neck look perfectly acceptable and 3D to me (and that's the only rule for shading, that it makes the image look 3D). ​​​

i feel like at this point it would be left to splook's discretion, since the argument seems pretty split. i personally think it looks okay because the style is consistent. 23:26, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

personally I think that if I added a darker layer of shading to depthen it then the pattern would get lost in it. he's a pretty dark colored cat. I can see the shading along the belly, legs, haunches, and tail pretty well. If I had to define it anywhere it would be on the face or the paws, like Paleh mentioned, which I could do if you guys think that I should <span style="">00:32 Tue Mar 5

I feel you're correct, Splook... I think you very well would start to lose the pattern. I personally only think you might need to define the shading on the paws, but that's it. You have the choice to do whatever you want with this; if you don't want to define it, that's perfectly fine and we'll respect that as an artist's choice. ​​

reuploaded i defined it on the paws, legs, and face <span style="">22:40 Tue Mar 5

Jake (kp) ~ for approval


01:28, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

would you like the file? 01:37, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

i already have the file from patch, but thank you for the offer!

01:39, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

It looks like the loner and rogue have more stripes, closer together. <span style="">1:42 Mon Mar 4 2019

The stripes also appear darker and have jagged edges. 01:57, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'd just like to say that the loner and rogue didn't have the master pattern, the old kittypet did. Just because the images are being redone doesn't mean the old images weren't required to match it. ​​​​

Obviously optional, but how does it look if you lighten the shading or change the tint? The shading to me sort of clashes with the bright ginger.

^i think its especially true given the style of shading. 12:30, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tint is fine honestly, I'm not seeing where its clashing but it could be smoothened and lightened just a tad 13:51, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

14:19, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the line where the belly meets the hind legs? Also, not sure if this is valid, but his eyes look almost white. Would it be possible to darken/saturate them a bit while still matching the rogue and loner? Maybe like the old kittypet  20:49, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

His eyes are blue, FYI. 00:35, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded not sure what you meant by that, but he's cited with green eyes.

00:53, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Eyes are green, wiki just makes it look white Malina457 (talk) 01:56, March 5, 2019 (UTC)malina

Yeah, every now and again, the wiki will have colors appear washed out...we're not totally sure why it does this. ​

Add a shading stripe or two right next to the belly fat lineart. It makes it look like it's leaking. 02:34, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sol (KP) - for approval
gotta cram for that FIHIC test now 02:55, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Shorten the tail, please. It's supposed to be tufted but not longer. Also can you move the mane to face towards the chest? As is, it looks more like a beard. <span style="">14:00 Mon Mar 4 2019

i agree with breezeyWillowstep21 (talk) 20:18, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

reup i mean i agree too 14:23, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

I know this pattern is a pain to match, but I think the darker brown should be darker on the main body and legs? Or at least make it more noticeable. 02:37, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

reup sigh changes not showing, but im sure it will show later. 12:44, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

CP-Light-colored cat (Star) ~ For Approval
--<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 11:38, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

can you smoothen and lighten the shading 13:52, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

i'll be darkening the fur color to make it darker so it's not deathening to see. --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​​ 13:58, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Changes not showing :/ --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​]​ 14:06, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups again Worked. --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​​ 14:07, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. Shouldn't this be longfurred due to it being a RC cat? All of the CP ones I could see had confirmed RC and so

When you look at the manga image there’s a slight distinction between the cats there and some have the “longhair” look while this one and another one appear as “shorthairs” 20:43 Mon Mar 4 2019

It says on the minor page it's shorthair, "Short-furred, light-colored cat with a lighter muzzle, lighter eyes, a darker nose and stars in their fur" --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​

Yeah, if this is the cat I'm thinking it is, they're definitely shown with shorter fur compared to others around them. There's a bit of a design thing where the short-furred cats are made obviously different than the long-furred ones. You should be fine this time around. ​

Define the earpink in <--- ear, and there's some shading leaking on the <--- leg from the flank. 02:44, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you actually define pink in both? 07:42, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

For the leaking i think it's on purpose? i'll remove it if it's not. -- 08:38, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you move the right eye pupil to the left some? 08:45, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Uh mink I think it's fine to me? -- 08:53, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Finally -- 12:17, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Hal (KP) - for approval
stripes stripes stripes stripes 18:24, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing any issues with this, so CBA? 19:37, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

sorry for breaking. the collar shading could stand to be defined <span style="">22:46, 3/05/2019

I see it.. 23:02, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

hmm perhaps define the light on it a little more? it would help with the depth, but i do get it is pretty tiny to work with

reup that's about the best I can do without making it painfully contrasting  02:43, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Matted tortoiseshell (DF) - CBA
so I asked David and they said that matted is unkempt fur, so I shouldn't need to edit the lineart if I don't want to. I'm also pretty sure that means it WOULDN'T get patchy fur, since that's not what it says. ​

CBA? 02:34, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt Le) - CBA
Took the shading from the original Pinestar image and just swapped out the base color.

Guess it's the exact same base and pretty much the same image. No need to let it sit. CBA?

DoTC tabby rogue (Ro) - For Approval
I think I'm good to post this as a grey tabby since the vote ended yesterday? also I made this on Sai and it was my first charart on that program so lets see how this goes <span style="">20:41, 03/4/2019

Join me in paint tool sai feerk Can you smooth the shading on the shoulder of the foreleg closest to us? It doesn't seem just as smooth as the rest of the shading I observed, just a bit would do. And there's some waste caught between the tail and butt, waste commonly gets caught there on this blan. I love this though dude. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 13:07, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Russetfur (Alt. D) - CBA
- she was missing this from her page, couldn't remember if she needed one or not. But when I was uploading the new file, I saw the old version. Idk if this is needed... thoughts? 20:59, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing where she is said to be gray as deputy? 21:24, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

It's for the manga I believe. 23:32, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Yep, for the manga Malina457 (talk) 01:55, March 5, 2019 (UTC)malina

Hm.. if this is for the mange, it should probably be listed on her page. 17:07, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, I can't find anything wrong with this. CBA? 02:45, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Brown StarClan elder ~ For Approval
i know the ear pink looks off, i'll tweak that soon 21:22, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Make the entire image brown. This StarClan elder does not have a gray tail, and that was in reference to Goosekit, not the StarClan cat. ​​

Re-Ups, I really liked the gray lol 21:51, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail and face. ​​

She looks a little green... 00:02, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

She isn't green lmao the shading is black and she's brown. It must be your screen. 00:29, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

That was a fair bit rude, Mink. I agree with Potato, this image does look quite a bit green. =\ ​

It wasn't meant to come off rude, I was simply stating that some screens give them a colored tint. I'm not seeing how she's green? There us no green on except her eyes. 04:34, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

She looks green on my screen as well. Multiple people have asked you to change it and that can't be a coincidence across screens. Saturate the color, or colorpick elsewhere.

Re-Ups, I wasn't gonna not fix it. But it should be fixed now 17:17, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

What direction is your light coming from? I may be mistaken, but the flank, tail and front legs tell me different. 02:48, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

It's coming from the left but a bit above. I used the same source on Spikefur and Sorreltail as this as I used the same shading from Sorreltail and tweaked it. 02:56, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt Le 3) - For Approval
I have attempted a semi solid character... 23:02, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripe should be a tad thinner to match Silverstream and Feathertail's alts. 01:58, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing friend! (If I can call you that!), But would you mind smoothing the tail shading? The earpink could also be defined a bit imo. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 13:12, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! (You can call me that :D) 13:50, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

hmm not a comment on the image itself but why was this readded to the needed list? might be missing something, but this wasn't in use prior to us removing all the leaders from the pages

I thought it was needed since Silverstream also has it on her page? Am I missing something?

I'm v sure she'd get this image since its in her trivia/mistakes. 07:49, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Snookthorn (KP) ~ For Approval
Eh. Black placement was annoying. 23:31, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the patches on the app are very slightly sharper than on here– could you sharpen the patches? 23:24, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups How's this? 00:18, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

DTC tabby rogue ~ For Approval
a spotted tabby of some sort

I feel like the earpink could stand to be darkned just a smidge, and shading smoothed on the pale part of the forepaw closest to us, if you don't mind. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 13:10, March 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Feathertail (Alt. Star 4) - For Approval
have mercy; I did this with a mouse 23:03 Tue Mar 5 2019

i feel like with the dark shading style on this image a little depth on ==> side would bring consistency to the image 00:12, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hopefully this has a little more depth; if not I'll have a look again when i have my tablet 01:01 Wed Mar 6 2019

tortoiseshell kittypet (KP) ~ For Approval
00:20, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on her hidden hind leg and shouldn't this be named File:SE-1.kittypet-1.png? 07:44, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Not sure. People've been using both ways, and I personally think this way makes more sense. At least, it's easier for me, especially when I have to put the finished image on the page and I don't know which super edition is number 4 or what not. Since they are in chronological order, and not order of release. 13:31, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

I think the naming isn't a big deal for minor characters, as they don't need it for the Charart template.

Leafstar (Alt. L) - For Approval
pulled all colors from the manga cover 04:32, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading just a tad on the brown? 07:45, March 6, 2019 (UTC)