Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=For Approval= Take it to the approval page

=Tweaking=

Cloudpelt (D) - Declined
Tweaked the shading, as it was blotchy. OA was Bramble and a tweak by Leaf-storm. Comments? 07:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:14, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to remove the shading at the base of the tail and put some more on the end? It doesn't really make sense to me. Skt Like a baws  22:41, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded :3 07:13, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his lower back, Looks good! -- 04:16, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base-tail shading, it's darker than the rest. :3 09:11, 06, 06, 2012

Re-uploaded :3 Pretty sure the changes aren't showing,   22:41, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around the flank and base of the tail. 01:01, 07, 06, 2012

The shading doesn't make sense to me. Remove the shading at the base and add it on the tail tip. 02:09, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Berry. But this has been up for a week. This is declined due to the one week limit for tweaks.

Can I take over? 15:53, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

No need to ask, just say, birthday buddy :) 02:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (W) - Redone
It was redone because it wasn't an actual dappled tortoiseshell. Comments? 16:27, June 3, 2012 (U

Define the yellow parts more so it matches the elder. 18:11, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the other parts as well, and smudge the patches more to match the elder. 99.111.198.23 18:51, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, that was me. >.<  18:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, and enlarge and blur the earpink~ Skt Like a baws  21:20, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

If you'd like, I can give you a color palette of what I used for the elder. Breeze whisker  00:46, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Breezy, can you? 23:26, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Re-did it. 22:15, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Skt Spoilers... 01:03, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Defined shading. 01:13, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

If this makes sence, try to make the individual patches smaller and more squarish shape/not as long/stretchy. :/ 01:55, 09, 06, 2012

Um...no...it doesn't really make sense. 14:03, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

The patches look over blurred compared to the other images. Can you try sharpening the patches/only smudging them? 14:25, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: This was the best I could get without making it too pixely. 14:33, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'll try again. xD Make the patches more smaller and not stretched out/expanded as much. If this doesn't make sence then ignore this. >.< 05:25, 10, 06, 2012

Basically just make it match the apprentice better. :P And shrink the white chest, it's a bit big, almost going onto the shoulder. 10:27, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: DJ: No, it doesn't make sense. Sorry. And Paleh, right now, I've been matching it to the elder but if more people want me to, then I'll make it match the apprentice more. 13:59, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Guys... it needs to match the //elder//, not the apprentice. ^^;

Thank you. 22:18, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:09, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Try...Making the floof more fluffy and shaggy. It looks spikey now. :S 18:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. W2) - Redone
Just added more dapples to match the manga image better. I suppose it could be considered a redo, but since OA was me it's more of a tweak. Comments? 03:38, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty. The part between her haunch and back, could you blur the dapples/flecks there more? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 04:51, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit. Lovely Scat~ 05:20, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

PALEH!! HOW DARE YOU CALL MY WIFE THAT!!! *KICKS* I think the lineart should match the warrior but I'm not sure. So beautiful <33333 05:28 Thu Jun 7

Haha. *grins at mounty* Yes it should match, and I seem to remember multiple people saying she was shown in the manga where this alt's from as shorthair, so maybe change her to that. 06:16, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

I really hate to say this....but if we're matching that...shouldn't she also be gray instead of ginger and white?

We've done them with colors before. 06:25 Thu Jun 7

Oh, jeez. One of mine. I see, then. You're right. Plus, it looks better like this anyways. xD

Blur the speckles above her haunch. They're sharp compared to the rest of the spots. 12:00, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also, get rid of the torn ear, as she is shone without it in the manga. 18:59, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:35, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Do you think you can center the earpink a bit? 21:57, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:29, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. 21:01, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? 21:08, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And do kittypet kits need a collar...? I can't remember x.x 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

He wasn't a kittypet, he was a rouge or something, he was part of BloodClan as a kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 22:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Unsure on changes. 22:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 22:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Kill ze waste. 22:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the black a tad. 02:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiiiny bit lighter, so the white is lighter. (But then you might have to define the shading on the back. Doesn't make sence. =_=) 07:19, 08, 06, 2012

Re-Ups^ @Dazzy, I'd rather not smudge because it doesn't look smudged on the rogue and loner images. 21:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is kind of flat... Can you define the lightsource? 14:17, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Black and White cat shading. e.e 18:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks flat. Define the 'highlight' and enlarge it, and darken the shading. 18:37, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt Q) ~ Tweaked
Needed the other lineart. Most recent OA is me. I'm going to redo the shading though, 'cause it irks me greatly.

Re-uploaded. No longer irks me as bad...but... ugh. I prefer darker cats. x.x

Can you blur the belly shading? Skt Spoilers... 02:37, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a 'lil bit? Breeze whisker  04:02, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Onestar (Ki) - Redone
You are looking at failure. So hard to draw dem stripes on dis small, cute, little, adorable kit blank! Meh. Redone to match other images. Comments? 04:49, 09, 06, 2012

Define the shading. Nicely done.

Adorable <3 Maybe blur the stripes a Tiny bit, And possibly make his base coat more, cream? Not sure if thats the right word, more like his other images, looks a bit pink to me. -- 06:04, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. ^^ Raven, I wasn't quite sure what you ment, so I just airbrushed the coat color with a lighter, pinkish color a bit. 06:23, 10, 06, 2012

Define the shading more, and perhaps thin it out a bit as the color looks off cause of it. Also, where's your light source? I can't quite tell. 09:19, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit? 19:33 Sun Jun 10

Sunstrike (A) - Tweaked
OA was me and the patches needed to be blurred more to match the warrior (I have my reservations about the warrior looking too overblurred but that's probably just me)  05:36, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

While this is up, could you brighten the brown just a tad to match, and blur the earpink? 09:18, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) - Redone
- Erk this irks me. I'm thinking about redoing it (tomorrow. I have no energy left.) but I'm not sure...should I redo it to match the warrior/elder more, or should I keep it like this? Also please note this isn't the best I could do. My hand is burned and my brain is fried so xD 01:32, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, make it match the apprentice more as the blanks are on the same side. x3 06:06, 10, 06, 2012

Woah, hold on. I made it match the warrior because the warrior is on the same side. And I matched the warrior from the elder. 15:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the //elder//. Not the apprentice.

Reduce the size of the patches, and increase the number. Breeze whisker  19:14, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little? 19:35 Sun Jun 10

Clawface (W) - Tweaked
Needed to be browner; OA of the most recent version was me. 02:28, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely as always, Loon~ Define his scars abit, can't really see them. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 03:08, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:31, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) - Tweaked
Just added another layer of shading. Because the ear-pink was under the new shading layer, I redid that too, but with the same color. Comments? 02:34, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a tad? 17:25, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Harveymoon (KP) - Tweaked
Wow, look how much I failed a year and a half ago. Anyway, shading needed to be darkened. OA was me. 16:22, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - Redone
Redone for many reasons, including blotchy shading, over-blurring of the grey, and such. I copied and pasted the shading from Patchpelt's warrior, so I'd rather not touch it unless absolutely necessary. I did the same with the size, position, and blurriness of of ear pink. I'm not a huge fan of how I did the scar. Comments? Breeze whisker  19:10, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case, since it won't show for me, change are here. Breeze whisker  19:12, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful <3. Define the earpink and lighten the back shading a bit. 20:13, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I defined the earpink, but unless there's a secondary light scource, or he's actually in an environment where there would be backlighting, I don't believe the back would be any lighter. Breeze whisker  22:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar just a bit? This is lovely~ 22:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  22:39, June 10, 2012 (UTC)