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Bluestar (Alt. Star 3) ~ Tweaked
OA was Giaria, I simply removed the scar and torn ear, as the image this was based off of didn't have them. 22:34, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little bit, please? I can see it in most places, but I'm having trouble seeing the depth, imho.

I'm hesitant to do so, as it wasn't nominated for that, and I can see the shading just fine; however, I'll do it if others agree. 18:43, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

I've had to do things an image isn't nominated for, as has everyone else. I don't think that's a legitimate reason not to do a tweak. This and the "it's fine" things really do need to stop.

Reuploaded. I understand. 18:26, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading 03:52, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:35, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is tad dark, can you lighten it a bit? 05:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:15, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can't really see the silver tail-tip very well. Define it? Storm &#9835;  14:39, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:26, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Leafstar (KP) - Tweaked
- ugghhh... so ugly... OA was me. Tweaked to match. I spent more time trying to get it to mach the queen, since both chararts show Leafy's back 22:25, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading 02:45, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:55, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the cream and brown parts- I cannot tell them apart. 08:10, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:43, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think her stripes on her other images were more smudged than blurred? This could be smudged too as you know, I can't see things properly. 13:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:24, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad darker on her other images, perhaps try sharpening them? 07:58, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:16, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

I still think her stripes can be sharpened just a little. Could you also define the cream and brown parts just a little? 10:07, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:26, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (K) ~ Tweaked
OAs are a various number of people I can't remember, but the most recent was Breeze. Tweaked to darken. My computer has difficulty displaying dark colors, so I can't tell whether it's too light or dark or what. 21:35, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

It's a little bit too dark imo, maybe lighten it a bit Storm  &#9835;  22:14, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 22:52, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

I have the file for this on my computer, would you like it? I think the shading kinda went poof in the process... Also, where's the pale underbelly...?

Re-upped Having issues with my email (please don't make me explain) so I can't take the file =( I tried to add a pale underbelly and I defined the shading but if I need to have the file to do this tweak I'm unfortunately going to have to withdraw. 22:57, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have it? Do I like reserve it?? so not sure how this page works, feel free to slap my head if I'm doing things wrong XD 11:30, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

No, you don't need the file for it- I was just offering it to you if you wanted it. Also, Bramblesnow, no, as she did not officially withdraw the image. Also, he'll need a pale part on the underside of his tail. ^^

I only said that because I thought she meant to withdraw it :P  this is the image I based on when I asked about the pale tail thingy Maybe define the earpink if you're allowed to change it?  11:47, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped No I didn't withdraw it Bramble, just said I might have to - sorry about the confusion. I added a pale underside of the tail, but using the pre-existing source, it's shaded so it may be hard to see. 21:38, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (A) ~ Tweaked
Redone artist was Diablo. Tweaked for darkness. 03:43, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

You darkened the eyes. Brighten them up, please. 03:45, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Only the eye white was darkened a bit. 03:51, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Restored back. Pale chest needs to be re-added. 11:41, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

The color for it is at about the range of #74553B. Yay for still having the files.

I think the underbelly is pale enough tbh imho cuz it's paler than the base pelt color. The earpink seems to be going out of the ear  please no more heartbreaking 11:46, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Um, Bramblesnow, it needs to match the other images. Right now, it doesn't. The original kit image did in fact have a pale underbelly that was actually distinctive, and it needs to be readded (on this and the kit) in order to match the original version of the kit's image properly. It was restored to the tweak page because it needed to be tweaked again.

-*sigh* Okay. Good luck everyone, good luck my love  Smooth out the shading where it meets the muzzle, define shading on the bottom of his tail. 11:52, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

He also needs a pale part on the underside of his tail. Did no one try and match the kit image or something when these images were done or..?

Most of his images didn't have the pale part on the tail before I think   14:46, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Since the kit came first, then the rest of the images need to match. Storm &#9835;  15:02, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

But the kit was tweaked for pale tail just now. (Not literally) 15:05, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

No, it wasn't. If someone had been listening to me, then you would have seen that the original kit did have pale parts. The warrior, apprentice, and deutpy need to have these, and I don't know why in StarClan's name they don't. The kit file did have them, but when Breeze tweaked it a few months ago, it got removed and never got readded because no one noticed it. As the first image that was redone in this set, all images are required to match the kit, whether anyone likes it or not.

Oh oops. I honestly didn't notice the pale part in the tail on the kit before, probably because I didn't look closely and the blank was small. I believe Beebs has the warrior/deputy versions? 05:24, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (A) ~ Redone
the oa was me, and I had to redo this for darkening - I lost the file and darkening the image without layers resulted in a blocky mess. That isn't texture, it's how I smudged the shading. 14:37, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him a bit more, as he needs to be dark gray. This is still bordering on neutral, imho.

Reups 23:13, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Tansypaw (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and she was tweaked to have stripes. I also messed with the shading, because it hid them at first. 19:16, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

These appear to be triangular styled stripes. Could you try and match a certain style? 00:41, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be lightened, as creams have faint stripes. Could be wrong :P 10:34, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I actually tried to make her a mackerel tabby. I didn't like it though, so I redid the stripes. She's now a pointed tabby.

Please define the stripes, for I can'tt see them at all. Perhaps adding more stripes would help, but that's just a suggestion :o 20:02, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

I wont add them because I can see them slightly, but I would darken them 20:09, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:31, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Daisy (Q) ~ Tweaked
she needed stripes. I'm the OA of the redone blank, and the old blank artists were Misty, Ash, and a few other users for minor tweaks. The reason why it looks so different from Skt's alt Q is probably due to our different shading. 01:37, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

The dorsal stripe on the tail seems to be fading? 10:35, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm just going off the alt Q, since it was posted first. It looks alright to me, it's just how it's been smudged. 14:18, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
OA is Mousetalon, redone artists are Scarletwind and Mistypebble and tweakers are Rowanflight and Scarletwind. Tweaked to add stripes. The highlights are irritating, making the stripes look funny. 05:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Make sure to add a layer of shading over the stripes; they look kind of flat 05:06, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I already did it, but I lightened the solid colour then darkened the shading over the tabby. That should look better. 05:26, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 08:37, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 10:26, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look kinda gray-ish? I still can't see light on the legs >.> 10:32, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:55, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Longtail (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Mosswhisker, Redone artist is Paleclaw and Tweakers are Sandstar12 and Hawkmask. Tweaked to change brown and elongate tail. 06:32, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Make the brown darker, it seems too light/dark cream also smudge the stripes maybe 20:07, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I'd rather not touch the stripes, although I agree the stripes are too solid. >< Might need to opt for a redo. 04:43, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

The color seems to not match. I used #514034 on color mode 10:20, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'm using the option of change the hue and saturation. Is there an easier way to do it or something because it's not working here. 22:33, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Itsy bitsy Daisy  I think I can post this. 11:50, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

they need to be smudged some. 15:31, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

'''You meant the stripes. ''' 11:34, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Misha (Ro) - Tweaked
OA is me; tweaked to be a tabby. 01:30, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (A) - Tweaked
- OA was Dawnfeather, redone by Sweetflower, then tweaked/redone by Cloudy, then tweaked by me. Added stripes 23:19, May 28, 2015 (UTC)