Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Graypool (Ki) ~ Redo
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a girl? ouo 19:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

To confirm, I did a tweak on it. I noticed you weren't sure. 19:56, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading a lot. 23:42, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Does this shading make more sense? 17:02, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing, reupload it again so we can at least see it in the file history? 19:26, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I uploaded it again but I'm not sure that it'll show the changes. 00:14, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the chest if there is any owo 15:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't intend to have shading there, but I could add it in if you want. 18:05, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading, and the shading near the chest-area (sorta on the neck) looks blotchy. Thin it out and make it less round? x3 00:38, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Duke (KP) ~ Redone
Woo 8D I know the earpink is weird, I'm fixing it in a moment...the collar, ears, and eyes are the exact same, so I'm not changing them. Comments? :3 17:12, 04 11, 2012

The eyes look kinda pixily, make the eye gradient smooth  17:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, I can't really see it. 17:17 Wed Apr 11

Re-uploaded. 17:37, 04 11, 2012

Maybe make the black on the haunch curve a bit more? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 10:04, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail stripe to make it flow with the pelt more. Skt, I can't, because I'd have to paint over or remove what's on the haunch now, remember how I blurred so it looked the same, and then it would curve...I tried, and it looked unnatural. Sorry Dx 12:00, 04 12, 2012

Psssh, no apologise, twas just a suggestion. ;3 Make the nose pink a little less neon, and define the earpink a smidge? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:32, 04 12, 2012

Define the shading towards the end of the tail  00:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:36, 04 15, 2012

I just noticed that the tag looks out of place with the studs coming out of the collar, could you remove it and add another stud? 23:50, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is optional but the ears look too straight cut not like a cat clawed them maybe make them more natural... I don't know how to explain. 22:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black patch on the tail reach the actual sides, there's a thin piece of white between the top of the tail and the patch. 10:44, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (A) ~ Tweaked
She needed a plumy tail. 8D First tweak~ *is failed* 23:39, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and the OA was Maplefern, with a tweak by Rainwhisper, a redo by Mounty, and another redo by Leaf-storm. 00:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the lineart, make the "bristles" (don't really wanna use that word, but I can't think of anything better) smoother and more flowing (think Squirrelflight but smoother; or maybe like a very silky, fluffy fox tail), and round the tip and make it "arch" a bit. It kinda looks like her tail got very surprise/scared xD 01:01, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So, something like this? :3 09:53, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the lineart on the tail look thicker than the rest of the image? If so, could you thin it out one pixle. 19:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:29, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make it match the warrior a bit better? 14:10, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Curve the tail a bit more to match the original apprentice blank and have most of the pluminess on the bottom of the tail instead of the top. I think this will help. 21:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Redone
I probably need to blur the shading here too. OA was Goldencloud tweaked by Appledash. Comments? 22:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make tthe earpink smaller, and yes, blur the shading. 23:08, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 13:38 Mon Apr 16

Define the ear pink as well.

This is optional, but can you make the "highlight" on her flank bigger? 14:57, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:17, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlight on her left arm, and (this is optional) add a highlight on the chest, so it looks like there's a pretty light source. :3 00:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, still.

Widen the belly "highlight" some moar. 07:46, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just realised there's waste around it, and I think I'm just going to redo the shading. I'll upload it tomorrow. 01:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (ki) - Redone
eeeeee, so proud. *squees* Okay, I'm done. OA was Shimmersong, Tweak by Bramble, redone by Mistypebble. Redone due to Lack of realistic stripes. So, besides darkening the stripes (I'm looking at it compared to the rest, and kicking myself), what else needs to be done? Maple On dA and Skye 21:11, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading. 21:21, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

The chest highlight looks a little bright 02:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes and blur/smudge them and the stripes seem to fade into the chest on the other images, try to match that. Also define the earpink. 03:24, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the outer edges of the chest more opaque :3 07:43, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Redone
Yeah, the stripes are kinda sloppy... :3 OA = Shimmerpool, and then it was tweaked many times. It needs to match the other images. Comments? 23:42, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Eep! So cute~ 8D Can you define the earpink and make the shading have reddish/brown tint to it so it matches the warrior? And I think there is a white pixel on his forehead. 01:28, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

smuge the stripes moar. cute <3333  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 03:05, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly and on the neck. Breeze whisker  03:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
I'll take away the pale chest if needed. Redone for triangly stripes. I guess we aren't listing OA's anymore soo. Comments? 21:54, 04 17, 2012

I thought Sky still had claim to this. 22:18 Tue Apr 17

-sigh- If she does, I don't know. It wasn't reserved for her. I thought she was taking a break anyways? I could withdraw it. 22:22, 04 17, 2012

Ha, I was planning to do it when I came back, but I'm not all that bothered. Have it if you want it. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Also, add a stripe running down the back, just like the tail has one, and (if you want), can you move the first part of the stripe under the chin up, an connect it to the eye? 23:37, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

When was she described as this? (just asking) And if you want her to have a paler chest, extend it at a top more. 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait, never mind. xD  15:26, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:31, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make this a lot brighter- she was described as pale gray. XD 02:49, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added stripe, defined shading, lightened it...and I'll fix the chest and earpink now. 10:09, 04 18, 2012

Make the stripe going down her back look less like shading. 18:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs to be much paler  18:17, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:48, 04 18, 2012

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 22:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes curve with the body more. 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the right front leg not have any stripes on it...? 10:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt. Kit) ~ Redone
Redone because the stripes weren't realistic. I know the earpink is crazy, but I'm too tired for now owo 01:48, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Cute! >3< 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

darken the earpink and make it a little bit smaller C:  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:29, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Fabulous! <33 Blur the earpink just a tad. 02:50, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 16:04, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Nightfur (E) ~ Redone
OA was Moonflight, and the shading and highlights needed to be redone.

Enlargen the earpink. ^^  17:25, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't care for ear pink on elders...it annoys me.

Nightfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was Shaf Girl, and the shading and highlights needed to be redone. Changes may not be showing, and if they're not, you know where to look.

<3 Enlarge the earpink. 16:10, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur he neck shading C:  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 04:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think it's fine.

Ruby (KP) ~ Redone
OA was MosspathOfSkyClan, tweak by Ivystripe, and a redo from Leaf-storm. Comments, questions, concerns? :3? (If somebody reserved this, I'll be guilty and sad. ;w; Let's hope not.) 04:18, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, lighten the whole thing, and maybe make the collar red to match the kit, but you don't have to, as it's possible and actually likely that she had a collar change since then. 06:08, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink a little bit. oops, Paleh already said that x3  06:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oh and Paleh I'll take the collar change. x3  10:20, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Thistle :3 Enlarge the earpink. 16:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? 8D  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 04:22, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 10:27, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Adderfang ~ Tweak
Yay. Two in a row. XDD I made the shading purdy. :3 OA was Honeyfur, with a tweak/redo, not sure, by Maplepool, with a redo by Scarletwind. Comments, questions, concerns~? <3

10:47, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 14:32, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and blur the haunch shading. 15:25, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 10:33, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudstar (W) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow, and I believe it needed redone because of the shading, but it also needs to match the new pattern that Cloudy used. I think his shoulder patch might be a little close to his belly patch :S 17:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more and define the haunch shading. 18:14, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

It matches quite well, Ivy. Make the ear pink a little bit smaller, though?

Lighten the earpink as well 08:44, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur (D) ~ Tweaked
I didn't see if anyone reserved this. It needed to be light blue-gray. I fixed some of the blurred and miscolored lineart and defined the shading since it was hard to see when I tweaked the colors. OA was Mistystar. Comments? 22:59 Wed Apr 18

Darken the earpink and shading a bit. 00:32, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:28 Thu Apr 19

Jaggedtooth (W) ~ Redone
I feel bad about redoing this one ;.; *slaps self* I tried tweaking it but it was x.x If Leafstorm wants to tweak it, she is more than welcome to. Comments? 23:13 Wed Apr 18

Stoneteller (Alt. H) - Tweaked
Muuuuuuud 8D Just adding that. Rather not change anything else since this was already approved. OA was kittypet1 with a redo by me (so I had all the layers). Comments? 00:21, April 19, 2012 (UTC)