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Thistleclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
I totally ruined it. >< OA is Nightshine, Redone artist is Ivystripe and tweakers are Ashshadow and me. Tweaked tom match description. Many credit and thanks to Burntclaw for sending in the apprentice file, and that made my life much easier. :) 08:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white 08:56, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

K so I smudged my white patches with a 10 px bristle brush and i did not smudge or blur the texture- i used a paint brush and added dark and light tones to show the light hitting the fur and the shadows to give his fur a "bristling" effect. Nice image, anyway =) 09:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the texture on the white please. 09:12, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

why does he have white paws? hes only speicifed white and grey on his face and shoulders. 11:03, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

nvm, cite got found 12:06, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

He looks like hes still mottled, is that intentional? 22:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

That's texture. There is tabby stripes I promise, it's just harder to see because it's a tiny image. 23:01, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more please, with a hard edged one px brush 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload If I have to turn the internet upside down to get a better smudge tool >< 07:21, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I'm going to be that person but I still seriously think you should smudge the white more ;; 13:13, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on his face isn't texture; it's little triangles that just throw the colour off...also, could you add a bit of depth to the shading? It's looking a bit flat. 13:15 Sat Oct 3

Reupload I'm being careful with the shading as the texture and stripes disappear when it gets too dark, and I'm near the brink. Everyone's fluffing up their Thistleclaw a lot! Do I need to fluff Thistlekit? 20:18, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

His other images appear to have a small bit of black near the eyes- do you mind adding that? The warrior and dark forest images show what I'm insinuating. 21:27, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't tell me to smudge it anymore, cause I did before and it somehow disappeared O.o. 21:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

White looks gray on the paws 23:57, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:03, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

I still think it looks gray to me, tbh. Try erasing some shading on them 01:01, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload White against dark is a pain >< 05:42, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

i don't know why but the texture makes him look mottled... 07:29, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) ~ Redone
oa's include bramble, mintstarr, shelly, silver, and jayce who was awesome enough to give me this and upload for me ;-; 11:06 Fri Oct 2

This should use the old linear art- it wasn't nominated for a linear tweak. Very pretty btw, maybe try erasing a little bit of the texture on the edge of the paws and the face so that it would look less grey. 11:36, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Jayce told me they didn't mind me using new lineart; I'll change it if you want it, but... 12:19 Fri Oct 2

idk but I was told to do it in the past... So... 12:20, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I literally don't care either way. Given that it's explicitly stated he was named after his spiky fur, I think the more spikyness, the better. I was going to say that on the other images, but the apprentice was archived before I got the chance.

Should I nominate the apprentice? 12:26, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

If you believe it should be, yes. I mean, given that ragged fur can change over time, I don't think you'd need to 30000% match Berry's style, but he could use more spiky fur. Anyways, Berry, could you define the ear pink? I actually didn't think he had any the first time I saw this.

Blur/smudge the shading a bit? 16:04, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, personally. Smooth out that white patch on his cheek, it looks a little too sharp compared to the other patches. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:30, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

White looks gray on the face 01:01, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

its fine, you can tell its white. 10:05, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Second try, tweaked to define shading

Can you smooth out the shading just a tad? It just looks a little hard-edged. 00:44, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA was Breeze, tweaked for define and redo shading 20:35, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I know shading darkness is artist's choice, but right now it looks too dark. can you please lighten it, and smooth it out on teh chest area? And define the facial shading and the paws. 17:02, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 17:17, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Still a little too dark. Also the facial shading needs to be defined some moer, and can you blur/smooth that little light spot on his chest? And smooth out the farthest paw? (I absolutely suck at explaining. Someone teach me how to.) 17:22, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

reups? 17:33, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more.

Nettlebreeze (E) ~ Redone
OA is me. Redone to match. I couldn't sum up to Shinx's awesome skills... :( 21:51 Sat Oct 3

I'll add the rheumy eyes and he ragged fur in my next upload. Oops. 21:53 Sat Oct 3

Don't forget the cloudy eyes! :) The colour doesn't seem to match the other images. His a bit orange-r than the others. (Is that even a word? Orange-r?) 22:00, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Did you add the layer of texture? There's a very light one on the apprentice, I'm not sure if you added it or not. This looks gorgeous. :) The color is fine, I think. I sent Hawky the file, the colors will probably be colorpicked fro that. I use highlights on my images, which makes them look a bit brighter. 22:10, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 01:17, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading's fine. 01:23, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, Shinx. I used texture. I made sure you could barely see it, because you can barely see it on the apprentice. 3:03 Sun Oct 4

No, it's really not @Apple. Please smooth it out some more on the legs 03:04, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

In my opinion it is. Literally it looks blurred as it is but if someone else disagrees then I guess. 03:05, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is fine, tbh. 03:06, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also I did color pick off of the apprentice .xcf 3:14 Sun Oct 4

Blur the shading on the earpink? This is beautiful. 22:34, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA is DJAngelCandy. Tweaked for flat shading. 00:50, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the light on the legs? 02:01, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:57, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs farthest from us a bit more pls 19:56, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) - Tweaked
I really want to redo the shading... 02:31, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Add depth to the shading 02:33, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: This...this should not have taken me as long as it did. Also, I played around with the earpink, colorpicked it from a gray cat. 03:23, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading plz 05:02, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

lighten her up more. 10:04, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: The waste...it's not there on GIMP so I've no idea why it's showing up on the wiki.. 19:45, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Did you check every layer? It looks like its the shading layer 19:51, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Of course I'd miss one layer of waste. <_< 19:53, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Tanglewhisker (E) - Tweaked
OA is Hawky with a tweak by Leafstrike.

Littlecloud (W) - Redone
Everything is the same as the MC. OA is Birchy and then I tweaked it/redid it a time or two.

Birdsong (E) ~ Tweaked
OA's were Canyonsong, Minstarr, and Iveh, tweaked to remove ginger. Thanks again for the file, Iveh! 12:32, October 6, 2015 (UTC)