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Mitzi(KP)~ For Approval
Ive had this for a bit, I was just waiting for Dawncloud to be done! ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:26, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is great! But could you define light on the collar as it's dark and sort of hard to see, whiten the white except for the face as it looks rather gray and add a bit of the base above the nose and between the eyes? Since she has a manga image and it has that bit of the base in the place it'd probably be good to have it here. You're getting good! SquidwardPlays 18:35, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Also, waste at base of the tail, both hindpaws, the outstretched forepaw, muzzle and both ears. I can't send screens in but if nobody else does I can later SquidwardPlays 18:37, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I dont see waste, and on my first upload, there wil ost likely be no waste. I do a waste check evry time, and I make absolute shure evry 3 times. ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:46, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

[https://imgur.com/a/PJ38A8Q%7CHere's reference for the waste. It is there.] SquidwardPlays 19:03, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add another layer of shading to add some depth to the image? Very nice job Owl 19:10, 02/5/2019

Oh and as beautiful as this collar is, it has to match File:Mitzi.RP.png her manga collar. pls use this collar for another kittypet I love it so much 19:24, 02/5/2019

Re-up, Rip collar. ❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:45, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

I liked the collar too, oh well. But the white hasn't been whitened at all. It's still very gray. Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:46, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

The waste at the base of the tail is still there, btw, just checked. https://imgur.com/a/u4SZlQC <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 19:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, it is the shading making the white look gray. now I get the pain of white cats. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:01, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Looking good ^^. but don't forget to extend the stripe of the base on the face to reach the muzzle, there is on the queen you're matching. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:04, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

oh, you before said to have the base color between the eyes, but I set my base color to the white... oops! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:11, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

That's my bad then, I worded it wrongly. I was refrring to the red color as the base not thinking about what you might've used for the base. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:13, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, its okay. We all do that sometimes! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:15, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Patches are a bit overblurred, compared to the alt queen in the set

I agree, the patches should be more rough and three toned. The colors don't seem to match the image that was pointed out. 20:58, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

This is great Owlbite, but the pupils are brown, make them black or white (your choice dear friend), and define the light on the collar, and yes there's some waste outside the top of the collar, and unfilled pixels near the latter, still this is good dear friendPotato=) (talk) 22:56, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

what unfilled pixels? and the puipls are artists choice, I vave had them on all my art. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:48, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Between the collar and ear, do you want a screenie?Potato=) (talk) 00:10, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

I see them, they are not unfilled pixels. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:23, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Would you like an unshaded screenshot of Mitzi's old image? I made it and would happily provide you with the correct colors should you need them. ​​​​​

yes please. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 01:48, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go. I realize the ear pink is hard to see, so the hex color for that is #EC7676. ​​​​

Re-up, this is cute! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:49, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

maybe sharpen the shading on the face just a smidge? this is adorable owl! 08:36 Wed Feb 6 2019

Re-up, the face is gray!!! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 17:12, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the face is no longer so gray. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:22, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Face should be whitened a bit, pupils are still brown, and the nosepink should match the color of the earpink, paw pads, and tonguePotato=) (talk) 22:55, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

Tongue doesn’t have to match. I have a black cat and his tongue is super pink, and his paw pads, nose, and ears are black. So nosepink is fine <span style="">23:03, 02/6/2019

I never match my nosepink to my earpink or anything like that, I don't think it's necessary. — ♡ <span style title="If you can believe,">you're such  <span style="style" title="you&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' re such a dream to me." data-rte-attribs=" style title=you're such a dream to me."&gt;a dream to me. 23:43, 2/06/2019 ​

like I said before, the eye is artists choice, and it is in all my work. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:03, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on both of the back feet and the shading in the ear. Define the lightsource on the center of the body too maybe? I'm having trouble judging where it is coming from, might just be me though so a second opinion here would be good. Smooth out the shading on the belly/flank. 01:20, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I just re-did the shading, I didnt realy like it before, and i think it is sort of cute now! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 03:27, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Whiten the paws again, the tinted shading looks much nicer! <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:49, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Derfine light on the ear furthest from us? this is cute! --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    12:58, February 7, 2019 (UTC)

Colors are off from the alt. queen - the darker brown is noticeably lighter on this in comparison. If it's due to highlights or whatnot, shrink those some to allow for the base to show

sorry if I cant re-up for a bit, I lost the pen tip for my drawing tablet pen, and i cant find the replacements. (dont ask how I manage to do that.) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 05:40, February 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, when I could draw aigain, a cryed of joy! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 18:40, February 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paw closest to us, along with both back paws, it looks like there's a layer of shading over them. Define the shading depth on the arm closest to us and smooth the edges of the overall shading so it appears more gradient. 18:04, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I hope this is good. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 19:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Light should be defined more on the legs, they needn't be covered in shadow.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:24, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, adding more light is hard, so sorry if it dosnt show up. If i add much more, it will end up looking white. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:01, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Mitzi (KP).kittypet.png, not what you currently have, Owl. The template won't work if the file names aren't what we have. ​​​

Did it, and Ill re-up for waste soon, even tho I just made sure there was no waste... somehow it got through. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:54, February 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, IDK what happened, but in the art thee wasnt waste, butn this it said there was. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 06:07, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Add light on the paws; they look almost solidly purple, and the difference between shaded/unshaded areas should be more visible

Re-up, this is the best you will get. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 20:11, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

There's no differences between the last two uploads. Did you perhaps grab the wrong save to upload or whatnot?

Re-up, yes I did. wow. Noe it is better tho! <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 21:05, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite, though the tongue needs some shading, and out of my interest is the paw pad closest to the tongue filled in?--Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:13, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

It is filled in. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:55, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, good now. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 02:58, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

The belly white should be smudged more roughly, out of interest to matching the queen

the white is the base color, how should i do that to the brown part? <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 22:28, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the brown sharply then, to get the same effect to the eye^^

Re-up, this looks better now! <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 00:57, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

either define or add the pale brown parts on her front legs 04:20 Thu Feb 14 2019

Re-up, should I put more shading on the lighter parts? <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 23:30, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

Pad color is leaking on the outstretched front leg 18:52, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

no, it is just the shading tint. ✬ Love is Love forever! ✬ 20:57, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be defined everywhere. 21:00, February 16, 2019 (UTC) Do you have the shading on a different layer? It should also be on one side of the leg and not covering the whole leg. This is marvelous.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 04:01, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I re-did the shading. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  19:26, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the legs and tail. Her front paws are also looking gray, whiten them. 19:45, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I can either have white paws or define the shading, not both. it might be do-able, but it will be very hard. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  20:05, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

It's very possible to do both. Put shading on the bottom of the paws, then make the tops, where light will be hitting it, whiter. The front paws, and the front leg furthest from us need more depth defined. They need to be whitened more too, particularly the paw closest to us. Whiten the back paw closest to us as well. Could you define the lightsource on the body more? I'm having trouble pinpointing where it's coming from. 20:15, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Also, the tail white needs to go further down, this needs to match her queen image.

Try using highlights if you don't use them already. It's optional, but it helps to brighten the image up.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:20, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

I bring a spark of knowledge, if this hasn't been said before. Put the white shading on a separate layer, that way you can toggle the shading opacity without affecting the rest of the shading. If you smudge/blur the shading just right, you'll get a seamless transition from darker shading to lighter shading. Ask me if this isn't clear.

Re-up, I just re-did all of it. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  02:36, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Much, Much, MUCH better! You're doing a great job Owl! The only thing I see is that the paw pads, earpink, and tongue need to be a bit more pink, since purple is sort of a unnatural color.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:02, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

The white still needs to be defined on the paws and tail. Try erasing some of the shading there, that will probably help. 03:47, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

the paw-pads are pink, not purple. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:29, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the darker patches, as they do not match her queen. They should also match her son, Fritz. --Potato&#61;) (talk) 21:46, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

the Fritz image is ment to mach mine, because i got mine up first, and they are the right color. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  05:32, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

You are both supposed to match this image, and Ari has the correct patch placement on the KP image they have up right now.

Tone down the tint

I dont get how my patch placement is off, and I got the color from the original Mitzi kittypet with no shading. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:43, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, for what I understand. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:47, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Could you brighten the paws to be white. They look cream rn 08:52, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the dark patches again. Owl, you may want to move your sig to a template as it takes up a lot of space on the source editor.--Potato&#61;) (talk) 14:05, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Make the belly patch skinner. Also I can always send your Fritz’s file if you needn’t it. ^^ 14:13, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and the light on the legs and tail. 14:56, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-done, ill fix the white soon. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  03:29, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, ugly? Okay? I never knew it was possible to do both! But somehow I did! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  03:35, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define your lightsource and lighten the dark patches. Make a smooth transition between them, you were looking at Ari's shading style, which is rough. Brighten up the white.-- 14:04, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I don't really get what you mean, but I re-did the shading. And I am not changing the color, I have the right colors, I am not changing them. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:59, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some shading on the white?

The patches seem a bit overblurred compared to the queen. 09:21, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the pupil in the eye farthest from us. It may be hard, but just draw a thin line for a pupil and it should look better.-- 16:48, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Whiten her white parts more. Might be my eyes, but the darker patches look like a slightly different color than that of her queen? The earink also needs to be lightened. The paler of the color on the hindleg is too dark compared to the queen as well. 15:38, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading? Whiskii ✿ 14:00, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Another option to brighten the white is to use pure white. Also, there are light pixels above > this eye. Is that supposed to be there?-- 22:43, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, Owl?

Re-up,yeah, I am still working. Working my life away trying to find time to re-up this and not fail at life. Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  02:07, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. Remember, ''keep it on one side of the character. That will make the paws less gray. Also, smooth out the transition between the patches, as it isn't meant to be so rough.''-- 02:31, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I recommend you look at the queen image again, it is if anything, rougher. Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  03:32, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Huge, huge improvement. CBA?

I'm sorry but I think some more of the brighter brown should be addes to match the queen. This still seems overblurred compared to her other image. 08:41, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, thank you Fox! I thought it was sort of overblured, but I was told to sharpen it, so I didn't know what to do! Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  21:22, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

They are still overblurred. Try setting the sharpening tool with a hard-edged brush at a high rate with a high opacity to match the queen. Still, a great job!-- 22:35, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

The colors don't seem to match the queens very much, they aren't as bright. 08:32, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

she does not look brown and white i see pink and brown --Willowstep21 (talk) 17:18, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

There's is no pink. I'm not sure whats wrong with your screen but on mine theres's definitely no pink. -- 03:43, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed with Silver.-- 14:44, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i dont know what you all see, but i have 3 secreens I use, the family computer, my computer, and my tablet. I see pink on all 3 of them. what device screen are you looking on? knowing that might help. Axolotls are my children!  00:57, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

The lighter patch on the hindleg is still too dark compared with the rest, the earpink is also too dark compared to the queens, although that is probably shading. Even so, could you remove some of that? The pattern is overblurred as well. There also appears to be a lighter stripe between two of the patches? Whatever it is, it looks out of place and should probably be fixed. 15:41, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Draw a pupil in the eye farthest from us, and there are lighter pixels above that eye too.-- 16:16, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Potato. Sorry if I didnt make this clear, and it sounds like I just expect you to know things, because I relise that is what I am sounding like, but if I re-up, and didnt change something, it means I want it to be said/confirmed by another person, so I will not change the eye untel then. the white above the eye is ment to be there, the brown dosnt take up half the face, so there would be white there. Patch, the line is part of shading the leg is shading, and i will fix it; i know the pattern is overblured, please dont repeat Potato's first comment, and the shading color dosnt need to be perfect, shading can lter things a little, like the earpink color. And sorry if I cant re-up for a while, my like has been sort of s*** reacently. (let me know if that is to close to swearing for the wiki!) Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  20:24, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I apologize, I didn't see Potato's comment. I also never said you had to alter the color of the shading. I told you to remove some of it from the ear/define the earpink, unless that was directed to someone else's comment ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 22:31, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Birchstar (RC) (Le) - For Approval
recreating a stripe pattern that I made in 2011 is hard... imagine that <span style="">20:39 Tue Feb 12

Define the shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:40, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think I removed all the "Y-stripes" in the redone version. Can you reduce them?

reuploaded <span style="">22:48 Wed Feb 13

Define the front leg shading? 23:37, February 13, 2019 (UTC)

shading could be defined all over, an maybe some depth too <span style="">00:36, 02/14/2019

reuploaded <span style="">04:24 Thu Feb 14

Where's your light source exactly? I'm not really seeing a consistent one right now but it could just be my brain muddling things. 04:47, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading or lighten it.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:17, February 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I redid the shading to make things clearer, i'm aiming for a light source coming from the front + above <span style="">22:30 Sun Feb 17

is -> paw supposed to be unshaded?

reuploaded <span style="">04:11 Tue Feb 19

could you lighten and smooth out the shading just a tad? 14:43, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

yes, been super busy. will update tomorrow <span style="">06:48 Sun Feb 24

reuploaded <span style="">02:50 Mon Feb 25

CBA? 05:31, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

sorry to break, but the base on this seems darker than the star and the shading seems rather flat on the front legs

May be me, but the stripes seem just a teensy weensy bit sharper on her StarClan. 23:00, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

FYI, the base on the star is 966c4f, the stripes are 81583f

reuploaded the stripes look sharper in GIMP than they do here ahh lmk if i should sharpen them some more <span style="">01:05 Fri Mar 1

Hmm was this file reuploaded with the one with the shifted colors? I see that File:Birchstar (rc).leader.png is lighter than what is here (rc is decapped), but this one didn't shift, when iirc it should've because that one looks closer to the other images

reuploaded hmm yeah i think i saved it wrong, this should be the right one?? i think ?? lol <span style="">00:03 Mon Mar 4

Swiftstar (WC) (L) ~ CBA
I heard that if they're leaders/KPs you can do two so here we go! Shading's hard on this blank...

Very good Warriorcat! Just add some depth to the shading and blend the earpink.Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:52, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Instead of blurring the earpink, you might be better of smudging just a tiny bit instead 04:28 Sun Feb 17 2019

Sorry but I cant find your light source..? -- 04:40, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

hm i believe its coming from the left 05:55, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

sorry for the double comment but you named the file wrong, it should be File:Swiftstar (WC).leader.png -- 06:00, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is the left, do I need to emphasize that? Also before I do anything to the image, is there a way to rename a file on here or do I need to upload a new one? (You know what I made that exact spelling error at least ten times last night...)

You can overwrite the misnamed file (if you use GIMP or a similar program) by clicking a button called "Overwrite existing file" with the correct name and that should fix it. Also yes define the light source.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:00, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

If your shading is coming from the left, I'd suggest removing the section of shading you have on that side of the neck, that might be what it throwing your source. When you reupload the image, instead of doing it over this one, reuploaded over the one that Silv linked and replace it here. Also might I suggest adding some depth to the shading too? 20:26 Sun Feb 17 2019

Reuploaded I ended up blurring it bc smudging is hard on paint.net. Also I don't really know what it means to add depth to shading so I hope this is better...? 21:37, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Adding depth to the shading is practically defining it. For blurring, try using GIMP (it's free). There are many ways you can blur, such as with Gaussian Blur (tho it may mess up the lineart) or running the dodge tool over where you need to blur. You can pick any brush to help you with blurring. You could also use to opacity bar to adjust the shading. The file name is still incorrect, you are missing the t in Swiftstar. Excuse the wall of text. (P.S you can smudge the shading too)Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:57, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

I'm very sorry, I'm an idiot--i fixed it and reuploaded under the correct file name but didn't change the file name in this page... RIP I'm smart. Okay, now try.... 02:14, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I'm a little confused, is there still any criticism now that I've uploaded the correct image...? 01:36, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

You ask for comments after three days have passed. Could you smooth out the shading a little on the legs?

There's also shading leaking on the <--- haunch, parts of the tail, <--- front leg, and chest (red). And the <--- ear pink (blue) appears to be leaking as well. 23:20, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry... I was hoping to appear smarter now than when I was 11... RIP. Honestly I should've waited given how long it was before I had a chance to upload but, alas... I did what I could with the shading, turns out paint.NET's smudge tool is actually useless for minor tweaks--or I just have no idea how to use it. Could go either way. 03:21, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a little bit on the chest, tail and neck? There appears to be some sharp spots there. Add a tad of shading to his right ear too. I can't tell if there's some shading leaking on the <--haunch? 15:52, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

i think the earpink is leaking a little from the edges? Whiskii ✿ 14:03, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be expanded and defined a little more. 23:03, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded At this point Idek if this is better or not. Dang solids are harder than I remember... 01:25, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart between the legs, and it could stand to be smoothed out everywhere

Reuploaded I did it and it took awhile but I did it and I'm happy 04:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Stonestar (Le)~For Approval
Don't tell me my art looks like Owl's because they showed me how to do cat art, so I adapted to their style, and first- first cat art I have ''posted! ''Axolotls are fudge (talk) 19:59, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Please recede the shading. It it making him dark. Ax, you did a great job on this, but just fix up the shading.Potato&#61;) (talk) 20:02, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the deputy image, which means the eye color and base color need to be altered

Could you also expand the pupil? It's very hard to see. 20:30, February 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I can't tell if the shading is good. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 00:49, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

this is nice for your first! blur the edges of the shading to smooth it out 01:09, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

The pupils are overblurred, please sharpen them. The earpink could use a lot of definition, and adding on to Burnt's comment, I think the shading should be lightened 5-6 ticks on the opacity bar.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:43, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the pupils are not blurred at all, they never were, but I hope this helps! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 02:39, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Err.. it doesn't appear you changed anything. Did you upload the right file? If not feel free to slap me.Potato&#61;) (talk) 03:04, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws, muzzle and I'd suggest removing a bit from the top of the head the left side of the neck and a little on the chest too. Add a white dot of light in his eyes. 04:00, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

I see a difference, the eye changed, and the earpink on the → ear is different. Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:35, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Add some eye white. And the eyes do look really blurry, perhaps sharpen the color.

Patch already mentioned the white! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  04:58, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't notice.

There is also some shading leaking away from the lineart by the --> front leg. 15:57, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Add more light to the right ear? (Also, the comment you added at first is very, very unnecessary.)-- 13:10, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

I dont get what you mean by the comment I added first. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 20:23, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

your comment when you first posted this, and i agree it was unnecessary

what does that has to do with the art? Why did that need to be pointed out? Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  22:11, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

"Don't tell me my art looks like Owl's because they showed me how to do cat art" This is what they are talking about. This can come off as rude to others. Anyways, define the earpink in > this ear.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:00, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, OWO that was ment to be a joke! Sorry! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:38, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please lighten the shading another 5 ticks on the opacity bar (or however what program allows you to adjust shading.) The pupils are overblurred, maybe try the sharpen tool at a rate of 6 or seven with a medium brush. And I cannot make out any earpink, darken it a few ticks.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:33, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, it is hard to sharpen things that were never blurred, but I just re-did the eyes. and the ear pink, cannot be made any more visible now. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 02:43, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

lessen the shading on the ear, that might be the problem

Define the eye depth, there's waste near the --> ear and <--- paws (blue), and leaking shading on the belly, <--- foreleg, <--- haunch and base of the tail (red) 23:24, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the shading depth and smooth out the shading? 00:21, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-done, I didn't like it before, and it was hard to do with like... 20 almost useless layers, I'll lighten it up though! Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:01, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, lightened by a bit. Axolotls are fudge (talk) 04:03, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking away from the base of the tail, and on the blanks right haunch and foreleg. 14:13, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also be smoothed out a little more on the right haunch. 01:01, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

the left haunch's shading is leaking a lil by the paw  Whiskii  ✿ 14:05, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Expanding on to Ivybreeze's comment, the shading could be smoothed everywhere. 23:04, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, can I do shading on this that I like? I dont think so! Axolotls are my children!  01:57, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 02:36, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, especially around the muzzle and forehead 08:28, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the eye color a bit more vibrant looks glazedWillowstep21 (talk) 20:37, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I like the eyes a little better now. program crashed, so it might have lost some of my work. Axolotls are my children!  21:38, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

The nose looks unfilled, and the eyes still look blurry. Perhaps add a definite gradient with a defined light source?

Might erase some shading on the <- side of the <- front leg. Otherwise, this is looking great Ax! <span style="">1:39 Mon Mar 4 2019

Shnuky (KP) ~ For Approval
blurred shading is hard wth

Shunky is mentioned to be dark, and this is rather light...Potato&#61;) (talk) 14:12, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

...this was the color i put when i was tweaking this and no one said anything when i tweaked it? I'll darken it if you want but ???

i kind of agree with potato that it should be darkened– she does look more neutral to me 14:35, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

i thought shnulkyś collar was black--Willowstep21 (talk) 20:31, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

We cannot tell precisely if her collar is black, but it has to match what it looks like in TaS. So, the flower ribbon has to be removed. Shnuky is not seen on the cover, which doesn't confirm her collar color unlike Sasha's collar. Judging from the picture, it looks dark, so the collar has to be dark.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:06, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

but shouldnt the collar match the manga image Willowstep21 (talk) 19:53, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Willowstep, that's what I was talking about up there.^^Potato&#61;) (talk) 22:44, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

i'll need a picture of her so i know what to put

Here you go!Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:34, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Also, fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue and the shading tint is making her look green.. so maybe change the tint to a blue or purple?Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:54, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading tint is artist's choice, Star does not have to change it if she doesn't want to. ​​​​​

will upload after this but a, i'm not changing the tint, and b, is that even a paw pad? might be something else

aight so i was doing stuff and that image you linked potato? that doesn't seem dark, seems more neutral. i will change the collar but the base color i am not sure about.

Hmm perhaps color pick the image’s base? Also the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the shoulder^^ Ik shading tint is artists choice but it really clashes with the earpink in particular, could you dull it just on that perhaps?

re-up your wish is my command

could you define the depth? love the shading color 00:38, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

The pink is leaking from the paw pads on the back paws -- 20:11, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

can you define either the shading or light on the collar? its just flat rn I need to try green shading   <span style="">17:33, 02/23/2019

Still working?

re-up

eggheart i don't see any leaking pink can you point it out?

If you zoom in on > this leg, it is leaking. Fill in the paw pad closest to the tongue. 04:26, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

will reup later, but potato are you sure that is a paw pad? for all we know that could be a dew claw. I want a second opinion because rn i'm not sure what that is.

i think its supposed to be the dewclaw <span style="">10:47, 2/28/2019

think what egg meant by leaking pink was that there would be some parts not filled in all the way on the back paws, the spaces between the pawpaws, but they're all pink here

re-up ya girl did a dumb

CBA?

it brings me pain to break CBA, but I think there is some leaking shading(blue), pad pink out of the pad(red)here you go. and the pad closest to the toung, everyone else had to fill in, and I think it should be fair you should too, and while you are at it, could you fill in the nose? Could you lastly, define the shading on the toung? Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  20:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Rose (FQ) (KP) - CBA
Guess what... I tried a new style! First time trying texture OwO  Axolotls are my children!  18:21, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

This looks really good! But could you define the ear pink for me? 23:06, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the brown parts of the legs and tail? 23:33, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

nice job on this one Ax, shading is leaking by the tail, and back haunch! Welcome, to a world  of wonder,  and beauty!  Now follow me,  into the light!  23:56, February 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define your lightsource. 03:42, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up! Any better? Greenflower, I wasn't sure what you meant about defining the light source so I just defined more the light and shadow difference. Axolotls are my children!  21:26, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. And I'm Potato, but Greenflower is fine ;) 21:51, February 24, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the haunch– this is pretty! 09:48, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

lighten the belly shading plz Willowstep21 (talk) 20:14, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading on the lower chest. 03:11, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Ty Burnt! Axolotls are my children!  07:22, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading at the top of the haunch to curve around slightly like this? Would be that way because of cat shapes, and also because it'll help solve that it looks leaking slightly away from the lineart there^^ (also, shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart on the chest and chin, but that could be patterning idk)

'''Reups! ''' Axolotls are my children!  20:49, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Snowdrop (Kittypet) - For Approval
i like to shade white cats <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:35, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Very pretty! :D Can you define the light on ---> ear? 20:40, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:45, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

add shading depth?

Still working? 23:36, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, I'm gonna re-up tonight <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups an attempt was made <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Where is your light source? <span style="">1:37 Mon Mar 4 2019

Waspwhisker (Kittypet) - For Approval
his name is cool <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:39, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Would the scar be showing at this angle? 22:47, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think his kittypet image is supposed to get the scar, or does it? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:38, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

It would probably show a little on his belly, judging by the deputy. 01:06, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Doesn't he get the scar after he joins SkyClan? I know it would be visible, but I won't add it unless someone can tell me he had his scar while he was a kittypet, Sorry Potato. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:43, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

oh my, I totally forgot he was a KP before joining. Okay then, don't add it bc *facepaw* I'm dumb. Shading could be smoothed on the belly and collar. 02:39, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

awwwww, pink kittypet :3 Willowstep21 (talk) 13:48, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Please do not comment unless you have a critique; it clogs up the page. ^^ 14:10, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:09, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reups this as smooth as i can get it <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:23, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm could you make the transitions from gray to white match moreso what is on the deputy? Here, they seem more "smudgey" for lack of better words, where on the other they are smudged, but not so back and forth and less transition space

Old warrior/deputy smudge effect was achieved by making the pattern with a hard edge and smudging with a 1 px brush. <span style="">1:36 Mon Mar 4 2019

Hard-muscled orange-and-black tabby (DF) ~ CBA
uh I tried, not quite sure if I named this right. 06:52, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

can you maybe tint it a little more towards the ginger side? right now it does appear a little brown <span style="">10:41, 2/28/2019

Uh, its on a really bright ginger as is. Its the texture and shading thaf dull it out. I'm still testing other things that might help it. 10:43, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

okiedokie ^-^ <span style="">10:49, 2/28/2019

Re-Ups, hopefully this is better, Winter? 13:15, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

can you highlight the flank a little bitWillowstep21 (talk) 13:28, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

What do you mean? I don't use highlights. It looks fine to me imo 13:29, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

nevermindWillowstep21 (talk) 17:07, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

It looks a little red/saturated on my screen.

The color isn't red, it's a brighter ginger than what I had. 05:33, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The base color is #fd8209. It might just be your screen as I hopped onto the laptop and it looks more orange than red. 05:56, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

regardless, the color looks rather unnaturally saturated, and i do agree that it is leaning towards being reddish. i dont think itd hurt to tone it down just a little 12:21, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

What exactly am I suppose to tone it down to? The base is a ginger and the others are either black or a dark red that's almost black. 13:14, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The base is listed above but the texture is black and the shading is 290101. It might just be your screens because I even asked a few other users opinions in Discord and they said it looks orange 13:18, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

like maybe just desaturate/darken it slightly. im not saying it has to be a huge change or anything: just a slight tweak would probably suffice 13:23, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

oh yeah, i forgot to clarify. i can tell its orange, but the fact that it is so saturated makes him look a little red and unnatural. 13:24, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

I don't mean to sound like rude or anything but I really don't think it needs desaturated? like the shading itself is red and a lot of the ginger cats have more red/ginger color than this does. Like I can try and play with it but I've tried toning it down and it just looks brown if I do. 13:26, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

you dont sound rude, you can disagree with my opinions. and if you cant get the colors to look right, then i wont force my opinion onto you 13:29, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

Consider changing the tint, then. It looks too saturated.

Re-Ups, the shading tint is fine imo. I just needed to clean up what was making it seem so bright. 14:34, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I concur with Burnt and Fox that the shading’s just a bit too saturated; throws it some

Re-Ups 17:57, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:11, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Bumble (KP) - For Approval
Putting this here, to stop it from distracting me from actual work, lol. 21:02, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

Lovely! :D Can you define the front limb closest to us shading? 21:48, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

the paws look great to me Willowstep21 (talk) 14:23, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

In addition to the leg shading closest to us, can you define the head shading? Malina457 (talk) 15:27, March 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

Re-uploaded - Expanded the shading all over and darkened it. 17:12, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Tweaked paw white - the changes aren't showing for me though? 17:16, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

Changes are here. 17:21, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Tweaked the pattern the better match the loner image. 22:05, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste outside < this ear. 23:20, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - It should be gone now. 11:37, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Tweaked pattern slightly. 11:50, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front leg closest to us?

Re-uploaded - Expanded the light on the leg, hopefully, that makes the light more obvious?. 12:21, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing again. 12:21, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - It appears that the changes are showing now. 16:31, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

They are not showing for me. Maybe try reuploading again Finches. 17:15, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I uploaded it again. 18:09, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Still not showing. Can you provide a link with the changes? 19:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Changes are here. 19:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Myler (KP) ~ For Approval
Based him off my own pretty kitty :) and Spooky told me to add a bowtie so I hope that worked out 00:46, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading and define it on the white please 06:58, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The paw pads are also multicolored, when they should be just one. 15:05, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Not necessarily, paw pads are artists choice Malina457 (talk) 15:35, March 2, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded Think I fixed shading, and BTW I based the pawpads off my kitty :) 04:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading slightly on the collar? 04:31, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Frecklewish (SC) (alt kp.) ~ For Approval
nice eyeliner 13:13, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading please? I can't really see it. 13:21, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 13:33, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

in the manga her spots are bigger Willowstep21 (talk) 13:38, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

They are also more round in the manga as well Malina457 (talk) 15:31, March 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

this follows after the mc which was the first in set? --<span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt; seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar  ​ 16:35, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

yep, i followed the mc. 19:10, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The spots on the mc seem more rounded and it appears to have a bit of light texture. Also could you define the shading some more, its still hard to tell where its at. Could you possible expand it a bit too? 19:15, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 20:38, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

so so sorry ari, but i do believe the shading could be smoothed out slightly. 03:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

The spots look smoother on the MC too

what do you mean by smoother? 15:36, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Less rough. Try blurring/smudging them. 16:11, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

If this is the alt I'm thinking of, it needs to match what's shown in the graphic novel, which has them as fairly rough spots. To smudge or blur them would probably deviate from the pattern, so I'd be careful as to how much you blur them, if at all.

reuploaded 00:39, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Leafstar (Le Alt2) - CBA
some sort of attempt was made <span style="">23:00, 03/1/2019

Could I suggest a pale underbelly too? the image this is based on looks like it has lighter markings as well as white on the face and around the chest? 23:12 Fri Mar 1 2019

Define the shading and the depth. 23:21, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

reup <span style="">01:23, 03/2/2019

reup again changes didn't show <span style="">01:25, 03/2/2019

reup one more time played with a few things, I think I'm happy with it now <span style="">01:44, 03/2/2019

hmm the stripes on the tail seem just a small smidge softer on the cover than here^^

reup <span style="">15:50, 03/3/2019

CBA?

Stagleap (TR) (Alt. Star) ~ For Approval
Comments? 00:56, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

.. he's not cited to be in StarClan..? 01:03, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

If this stays up, smooth out the shading. 01:23, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

He does, if you look at his page

The family tree doesn't confirm him to be in StarClan... it doesn't say anywhere he is in StarClan. 01:42, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

There're categories on the top of the tree, one of which is StarClan. If you click on that, Stagleap is included, therefore confirming that he's in StarClan.

Ahh. Redclaw should have his Star put back up as well, because Brackenwing is listed and the mate heart, but his icon is cut off.. wow. 02:47, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Wait.. I'm not finding it. Are you sure this isn't the Stagleap from GC? 02:56, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading some? I realize thisis a discussion on wether he's in starclan but could we possibly lessen it unless its commemts to the art, I believe that would go to the PCA talk if theres confusion. 12:33, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:41, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

I did check for the cite of this Stagleap's being shown as gray however its not the right one. It's ThunderClan's thats shown as gray so I believe this would not be valid. 17:48, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

There are two Stagleaps shown on the family tree: the one in Tallstar's Revenge who is the father of Onestar, and the one in Goosefeather's Curse who is the father of One-Eye and Speckletail. TR's Stagleap is a dark brown tom but is shown as a gray warrior and not in StarClan. GC's Stagleap is a gray tabby tom but is shown as a gray StarClan cat. This could easily be switched to be the GC Stagleap, as this would still apply. I'd think the blank would have to be long-haired though. 23:32, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Are you sure GC's would get it? From my understanding that would be a partial. 23:37, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Nope. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ TR Stagleap was most likely gray prior to the update and kicked out of StarClan. If not, there are light color starclan cats this could also work for. 23:45, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Ah okay, was primarily asking as I thought Gray tabbues listed as a solid gray was partial but I could be wrong. 00:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Dawn of the Clans Tabby kit (Star) ~ CBA
been a while since I used these blanks

What a cutie. Define the shading depth. 01:22, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded cute but dead lol

Could brighten the eyes just a tad, rhey seem to match the pelt color 11:41, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think there's a rule against that; Flower (DotC) has similar eyes. Plus, I used a reference and directly color-picked from it.

Eyes look fine to me. 15:24, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

^^ CBA?

Elder blanks - for approval
aaa ty all so much!!!! Whiskii ✿ 02:49, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe that the heads are just very slightly too big (from reference images, it seems like a cats body is around 2 (2/3) heads) 03:02, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the nose bridge a bit - like this. 12:22, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. with the way the <-- whiskera are pointed would the --> left ones show? I adore these 12:30, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Might be my personal problem but could you make the smile a little less connected to the whiskers/less...noticeable? I love a smile and a small one is cute but this one seems overly large for a cat. Idk. These are really good though! 19:39, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with what winter said about the smile– i also think it would be more in character if it were lessened 03:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hows this look? blanks are hard!! Whiskii ✿

hm, it still looks as though the whiskers/mouth are touching maybe curve the mouth down a tad instead of up? 15:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Are changes showing?

last nitpick– the long hair tail's seems to lie unnaturally flat, could you maybe add more fur lines there? i love these so much 15:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is optional; but maybe since they are elders add little lines under their eyes to make them seem older?

15:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mind checking for a few darker gray lineart pixels that aren't quite black? There's a few scattered around on it

i think wiki's having a problem rn or somethin because the changes arent showing, ill get to theother comments in a sec  Whiskii  ✿ 16:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded are the changes finally showing? also i tried putting a line under their eyes but it blended too much with the whiskers. i may still add it if you really want to  Whiskii  ✿ 17:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the blanks could benefit from a line under the eyes - just to make them look older. 18:07, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I also just wanted to point out the longhair's tail is like that because its supposed to be flat on the ground ^-^  Whiskii  ✿ 18:40, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I mean they look fine without the line imo 20:27, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed; the line might make it too crowded. 22:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tried something out, thoughts? Whiskii ✿ 22:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

PoT-6 Blue long-furred kittypet ~ For Approval
idk if i named it correctly-- 03:37, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and expand it on the tail

Could ypu expand the haunch and front body shading too? 12:30, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

reups -- 04:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth it out more? and add more tail shading <-

reups -- 09:06, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

reups again  -- 09:11, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

CP Striped StarClan (star) - CBA
comments? 20:36 Sat Mar 2 2019

Almost thought this was a Firestar alt lmao can you smooth the shading ? 21:43, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded this is sort of the limit of sai's smoothness - was there a particular area you wanted smoothed? 21:53 Sat Mar 2 2019

CBA?

Darkstar (SC) (Le) - For Approval
eh <span style="">21:13, 03/2/2019

Smooth out the face and tail shading a bit? 23:11, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

reup hopefully that's better <span style="">15:51, 03/3/2019

Hickorynose (Alt. T) ~ For Approval
twas called gray as a tunneler, never did get to nab one of these so gg

Can you smooth tail shading? There seems to ve a blotch in the center of the tail as well 11:42, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded that's where it switches to the other side, per the source

Could you smooth it some though? 20:25, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'd like to refrain from smoothing it more unless others agree, as I already spent a bit of time trying to smooth it last time, and there's not much else to be done

I think it should be smoothed a bit (just the blotch), as well as the chest shading. :) 22:17, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded probably can't see much of a difference, but did say I couldn't do anything, not for lack of attempt, so

CP Dark-colored StarClan (star) - CBA
comments? the starclan blank is my favourite to shade tbh 23:16 Sat Mar 2 2019

Should it be a tad darker, if called dark? Malina457 (talk) 01:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

could you very very slightly define the depth? 03:44, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I colourpickedfrom the manga image so the colours would be true - so might I ask for a second opinion? Will reupload shortly for shading depth though 07:12 Sun Mar 3 2019

reuploaded 07:29 Sun Mar 3 2019

CBA?

Dawn of the Clans Pale gray kit (Star) ~ CBA
00:54, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shading a tad? 11:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 19:04, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Black and white kittypet- For Evaluation
Not sure how I feel about this.. also I know about the thumb thing yet I can't remove it.. help?-- 01:53, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

there is waste all around the image, thr shading is leakinf all around and It could also be expanded. It also appears that the earpink on the ear is leaking away from the linearrt. Th black patch on the tail could also be softnened. Malina457 (talk) 04:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

I know.. let me see what I can do with Photoshop, mystery person. 02:00, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

are you using layers? because ive noticed that the black patches are leaking from the linear art. try putting the linear art on another layer and leaving the black on the layer below. 02:50, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Yep, I do use layers. Do you want me to set them to multiply? 03:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

no, you dont need to set it to multiply. for the waste, tbh just go to the appropriate layer and erase it. also, i recommend using a 10 px smudge tool on 40% strength to smooth out the shading. 03:20, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ugh I'll mess with it later. 03:23, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

like basically apply the smudge tool for the edges of the shading by moving it in a motion perpendicular to the shading edges (ok that sounds. extremely like flux and gauss's law ew). i find this easier than the blur tool, which generally sucks 03:22, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Coukd you smooth the shading and it expand it. Could you also darken the earpink a tad, it seems really neon. 03:29, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the shoulder, chest, and stomach. 04:33, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded did I upload the right file? 04:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

there is stil waste Malina457 (talk) 04:47, March 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

Ack, whenever I overwrite the existing filename, no changes show... 05:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Wait I may have figured it out.. 05:04, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded yes there we go. Better? 05:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again more things, will get the waste in a second. Suggestions? 05:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

the shading needs smoothing out in general– namely on the shoulder. also, could you tone down the color of the paw pads? its slightly neon. 05:25, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ye I'll get to that 05:30, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo it tomorrow, since I don't like how it currently is. I also lost all my layers, which is another reason I'm redoing it. 05:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes are not showing. I tinted the shading and I'm well aware it needs to be smoothed out. Also there is waste outside the tail, but I can't erase it due to the way Photoshop crops the image. 16:10, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Wait they are popping up but this is still showing.. help? 16:24, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Look here for changes. 17:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

it’s showing up now i think. anyways, there is a lot of waste by the tail, there needs to be more shading where the front leg and stomach meet. Also can you smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us and darken it a bit, it looks a bit too purple to be shading.

17:48, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

It's not showing up for me. Ari, I can't kill the waste due to the way Photoshop displays the image, but I can try with magic powers. I knew the shading had to be smoothed a bit.. let me do that. 19:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded tried fixing things, will kill that waste. 19:52, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

KERBLAM yay changes are showing. This better? Also, Photoshop let me kill the waste *happy dance*! 19:56, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twas more played with far front leg shading. Smudging is fun. 20:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

More wasted has been killed  20:10, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the tint of the shading, or perhaps put it into multiply? 20:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded did both. Better? 21:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Minor Tweaks  22:01, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

this is looking better! could you darken the shading so that it looks less saturated? 22:53, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is getting better! I think colour on the pawpads and ears are leaking away from the lineart though? 22:56, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded that's just lighter pink Finches. I will get to the shading now. 00:26, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:34, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, and smooth out the shading everywhere.

darken the shading tint a lil- it still looks neon 08:42, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Lulu (KP) - CBA
ok im not exactly proud of this rip had to rush this too cuz man senior year sucks. side note: did her bc of her name. 02:42, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the --> back leg 03:30, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the white muzzle more creamier? She's not listed to have white. 04:34, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

while you're add it could you add shadow to the chest? don't think there should be light there

reup 05:21, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sol (L) - For Approval
<span style="">14:48 Sun Mar 3 2019

hm could you add some depth to the chest? it looks a little flat in that area. 14:54, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Pulled out a few hairs but there's not much else I can do without screwing up the light source. <span style="">15:00 Sun Mar 3 2019

Reuploaded again. wtf wikia <span style="">15:01 Sun Mar 3 2019

It's not uploading. I'll try again later I guess??<span style="">15:15 Sun Mar 3 2019

I have an idea Breezey. Try uploading the changes to VVcap, Gyazo, or Ezimba. Smooth out/lighten the shading, although this is your choice and you can always ignore me. 16:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Also, make > this ear more tufty, since it is just a little pointed. 20:11, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

can you add the eye shine please? <span style="">20:40, 3/03/2019

I think the eyes are in shadow? Malina457 (talk) 00:13, March 4, 2019 (UTC)Malina

The eye shine should still be there <span style="">00:26, 3/04/2019

I think the way the eyes are designed are artists choice as bot every one has very noticeable eye shine. 01:19, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I can't actually see any eye white/eye shine at all. It doesn't look like it's there, regardless of it being in shadow or not.

Whitestar (L) - For Approval
20:12, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Runningnose (L) ~ for approval
20:37, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sandynose (KP Alt) ~ For Approval
this isn't the best but here he is 22:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the lighter gray a lot.

Re-Ups 13:49, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Bob (KP) - for approval
bob's such a weird name for a cat <span style="">22:49, 3/03/2019

pretty! could you define the shading depth slightly? 22:57, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shading depth is fine. Just remove a bit of shading on the back to help your light source. <span style="">1:31 Mon Mar 4 2019

Volestar (L) - For Approval
aaaa <span style="">00:00 Mon Mar 4

Vole is still a funny word. Define the shading depth. 00:33, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Shading depth is fine. Not everything needs super-dramatic lighting. <span style="">1:30 Mon Mar 4 2019

I disagree. It needs a little more depth. Most other images have it. This is really good though! 02:35, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Breezey; the depth is perfectly acceptable. I'm not sure why there's such a focus on really dramatic shading depth nowadays, but this image is fine. ​

I respectfully disagree. While I can tell the shading is present, I can hardly distinguish it from the base even with my screen's brightness all the way up. I think either defining the shading or the depth would be beneficial. 13:25, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Jake (kp) ~ for approval
01:28, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

would you like the file? 01:37, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

i already have the file from patch, but thank you for the offer! 01:39, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

It looks like the loner and rogue have more stripes, closer together. <span style="">1:42 Mon Mar 4 2019

The stripes also appear darker and have jagged edges. 01:57, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'd just like to say that the loner and rogue didn't have the master pattern, the old kittypet did. Just because the images are being redone doesn't mean the old images weren't required to match it.

Obviously optional, but how does it look if you lighten the shading or change the tint? The shading to me sort of clashes with the bright ginger.

^i think its especially true given the style of shading. 12:30, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tint is fine honestly, I'm not seeing where its clashing but it could be smoothened and lightened just a tad 13:51, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sol (KP) - for approval
gotta cram for that FIHIC test now 02:55, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Shorten the tail, please. It's supposed to be tufted but not longer. Also can you move the mane to face towards the chest? As is, it looks more like a beard. <span style="">14:00 Mon Mar 4 2019

CP-Light-colored cat (Star)
-- 11:38, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

can you smoothen and lighten the shading 13:52, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

i'll be darkening the fur color to make it darker so it's not deathening to see. -- 13:58, March 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Changes not showing :/ -- 14:06, March 4, 2019 (UTC)