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=Tweaking=

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
I'll take away the pale chest if needed. Redone for triangly stripes. I guess we aren't listing OA's anymore soo. Comments? 21:54, 04 17, 2012

I thought Sky still had claim to this. 22:18 Tue Apr 17

-sigh- If she does, I don't know. It wasn't reserved for her. I thought she was taking a break anyways? I could withdraw it. 22:22, 04 17, 2012

Ha, I was planning to do it when I came back, but I'm not all that bothered. Have it if you want it. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Also, add a stripe running down the back, just like the tail has one, and (if you want), can you move the first part of the stripe under the chin up, an connect it to the eye? 23:37, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

When was she described as this? (just asking) And if you want her to have a paler chest, extend it at a top more. 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait, never mind. xD  15:26, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:31, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make this a lot brighter- she was described as pale gray. XD 02:49, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added stripe, defined shading, lightened it...and I'll fix the chest and earpink now. 10:09, 04 18, 2012

Make the stripe going down her back look less like shading. 18:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs to be much paler  18:17, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:48, 04 18, 2012

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 22:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes curve with the body more. 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the right front leg not have any stripes on it...? 10:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes a bit? 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly and lower the opacity on it a bit. 11:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redone...not much to say. :3 Comments? 15:20, 04 22, 2012

This is just an opinion, but even thought we've approved images with this kind of tabby style, it looks more like mottled fur effects to me. Though, it might help if the stripes all didn't point in the direction of her tail  15:34, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 19:15, 04 22, 2012

blur the shading on her back and neck -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:51, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her since was described as a pale gray tabby? 19:55 Sun Apr 22

Re-uploaded. 21:15, 04 22, 2012

Define the shading a bit and blur it. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  01:30, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the gray more, and there's waste in the triangle between her hindleg and front leg, on the herbs, and on her chest. Also, can you make the stripes curve with her body a bit more, and make the zigzag down the middle less triangular? 05:09, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't change the stripes without remaking them...but I can try. :3 Also, I see the waste by the ears and tail. I'll clear it in the next reupload. 23:56, 04 26, 2012

Make the earpink bigger. There's waste at the feet and back too. 03:55 Fri Apr 27

darken the shading -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:49, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste 03:58, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing, I believe. 23:31, 04 28, 2012

Lionblaze (Alt. A) ~ Redone
Well, I thought...while he has this alt. The pale belly's a preference, I can remove it if you want. :3 Comments? 22:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:12, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

His ear should be torn. 21:57, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  23:00, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate it so it's more orange and less golden. 23:22, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:05, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste in the nick ear, and it might just be me, but the shading seems ti be the same color as the stripes. I suggest using a darker shade of that color (if it is colored) or putting the stripes under the shading layer. 05:14, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I redid that redo. 13:27, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and define the tail shading.Skt Knock knock  13:44, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Is he supposed to have white markings? 21:02, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Misty, I put it there because I like it, but if you want, I can make it more opaque or just thoroughly delete it. 22:12, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pale markings aren't the same as white. Please change it..

Funny, it looks like light ginger on my laptop. 09:21, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, it's white. 20:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:04, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back and haunch shading. Skt Knock knock  22:10, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the face shading. 22:29, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) ~ Redone
Well, that was fun. :3 I picked his colors off of pictures of both dark ginger and pale ginger cats, so I'm pretty sure this is accurate colour-wise. And I gave him his daughter's eye. 8D Comments? 16:55, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink easier to see through the shading, please :3. 18:34, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat leg and tail shading a bit. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:27, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Round the shoulder shading a little bit. Breeze whisker  03:23, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:10, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad ^~^ 23:22, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think that the shading is fine. The dramatic change of darkness to lightness in the shading gives the image a quite good sense of depth. 23:34, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shoulder shading. 12:18, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:33, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Patchpelt (A) - Redone
Here's his apprentice. Redone to match his warrior. Leggy made me give him a purple nose. I'll fix it in the next upload. Thanks to everybody who watched. <3 Comments? Breeze whisker  02:58, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

But I like the purple nose...;.; Blur the shading on the face and front leg/shoulder a tad. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 03:35, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. No purple nose. Breeze whisker  03:22, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be dark brown. File changes may not be showing yet. Comments? 05:29, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink less red? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  11:10, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

And make the earpink a bit more triangular. 12:29, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ki) - Redone
Redone because the shading and the paw was wrong (that's not why it was redone..x3) -gives thanks to my friend who watched and critiqued- ouo Comments? 21:24, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

-Feels special- lolz x3 I sorta missed the bell adding part, so can you add a highlight/shine to it and move it two or three pixels up a bit? ^~^

Make the white less grey, and define the earpink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt ANZAC day  22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black a bit less pure black and define the earpink ( Maybe... |D ) 00:10, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...maybe make the collar more curved towards the center. 09:23, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I...have a bit of a history with losing files... x3 Yeah....... 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...could I take over? 22:17, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 01:04, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3  03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.) 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. 12:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink and blur them higlights. x3  21:24, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste below the stomach. 21:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tear the ear. 03:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots more. 18:24, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... I'm gonna have a huge quitter moment but a) I hate this image, b) my blur tool won't blur the shading anymore, c) this'll take me much longer then the two week timespan d) I hate this image! So I'm withdrawing this. Anyone who wants this may have it. 23:55, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this. :3 <span style="">02:12, 28, 04, 2012

Minnowtail (Alt. Ki) ~ Redone
Shading issues. First and only OA was Mistfire. Changes are probably not showing. 22:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and if needed maybe lighten up the base color a tad? :/ <span style="">06:51, 27, 04, 2012

Define the eye depth. 07:27, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  12:36, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry if the first image looked dark. I had no idea where the base color was on her old image @_@. 23:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 15:34, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink more pink and the nose black/dark gray. 18:09, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The nose looks black, but it's a very dark gray. 22:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sunspots (Q) ~ Tweaked
Hay-o~! Yay for Sunspots. OA was Bramble with a redo by Splashpelt. Ivystripe did a random upload, a 'correct image'. Comments, questions, concerns...?

03:54, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot. She should look white and ginger, not gray. xD

Reuploaded. 04:37, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading and uncross her eyes x3 01:11, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a bit? Also darken the nose color. :3  18:08, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Silverstream (Q) ~ Redone
Queens FTW. OA was Sandstar with a redo by Iceheart22. Comments, questions, concerns...? :3

03:54, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made bright highlights. Yay? Better? 8D? 03:58, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit. =P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  12:35, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reason being redone? Blur the belly shading, and it looks like there's a stripe of shading going down her belly, making it look uneven. Can you fix that? 01:05, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (D) ~ Redone
Okay I know this was origanally supposed to be a tweak, but in chat Cloudy said that if it was impossible to tweak it could be a redo, not sure if this is what she meant but this is how I did it and if you want me to just tweak it then I will. But the shading needed to be fixed, the scars needed to be redone, and the earpink didn't match. The OA was... Scarletwind I think. 19:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a bit. 20:32, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Dustpelt (Alt. W) ~ Redone
OA was Ashshadow, and the shading was blotchy, and it needed to be light brown, but it looked golden brown.

blur the shading a tad and define the earpink  Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:47, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Briarlight (Ki) - Redone
Changes aren't showing. Needed to match other images (took colors from warrior). Last OA was Silver. Comments? 21:21, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? <span style="">02:06, 28, 04, 2012

Nope, same color as the warrior. 04:17, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink. ^^  18:06, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (L) ~ Redone
Redone cause of pattern, shading, etc. Not sure who the OA is, since Desmond renamed it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock 02:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like a Stoneteller with mud. If you were going for a tortoiseshell, could you make the brown stand out more and make it look more like brindle patterns? I always took "brown and black" to mean a brown tabby with black stripes, but that's just me, I think a brown and black tortoiseshell is possible. 03:18, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's this? xD <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  03:35, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the brown just a bit more? 03:39, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  03:55, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just a preference, but could you add a few variants of the brown color into the mix? Maybe a reddish brown mixed in? Not totally ginger, just reddish brown. 15:49, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think it's fine. I've seen cats with colors just like this, it's perfectly natural, and he was just described s black and brown. Any more colors and he'd really be a tortie then. But I guess it's up to sky. 18:40, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (W) ~ Redone
Redone for the same reasons as the leader. OA is Insaneular. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock 03:55, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

I defined the sahding, cause i hated it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock 03:57, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the muzzle. 17:08, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Man I did this forever ago o.e I added more stripes, made the earpink match the elder, and towned down the highlights. OA was Maplepool. Comments? 04:03 Sat Apr 28

Define the earpink a tiny bit. 15:30, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It's from the elder. I think it's fine. 15:36 Sat Apr 28

Define the nosepink? 17:56, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made it the same as the apprentice now. 20:16 Sat Apr 28

Raggedstar (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I just tweaked the stripes to match the leader and I'm not changing anything else. OA was me. Comments? 04:47 Sat Apr 28

Could you define the stripes a tad? D'awww, he's so cute. <3333 15:41, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I darkened the stripes although it might be hard to see with the patches. 15:51 Sat Apr 28

Willowclaw (W) - Redone
Original artist was Bramble, and the shading was blotchy. Comments? 20:06, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Ki) ~ Redone
The shading and earpink needed to be redone. I know that the pelt color is darker. I'll fix it in the next upload. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:12, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and is the nose supposed to be dark gray? Can't remember if that goes with gray cats >.<  22:31, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It should be grey regardless, his apprentice has a grey one. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  23:02, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. Q) ~ Tweaked
Shading / ear pink fix. OA is me. And yes, her nose is supposed to be pink, as that's what she was described with.