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Broken Shadow (Q) - Redone
Took colors from her sharpclaw, but the pattern is screaming triangle tabby to me. I'd love to redo them both for pattern. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 02:18, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the belly "highlight" round-er... :3 02:30, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah...both of them are total triangle tabbies....anyway, define the shoulder highlight a smidge. 03:14, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the "highlights" on the legs. 23:47, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some. 18:08, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:30, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly blur the shading a tad. (Mostly the belly and haunch) 19:43, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe widen the belly "highlight" a smidge. 07:40, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Q) - Declined
Tweaked to be darker and I only ran the burn tool through it, so I'm not fixing anything else. Changes can be found here if they aren't. 20:57, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make it darker, and I think (not sure though) that while using the burn tool (as I know for me it happens at times) the shading went a bit blotchy, so blur it a bit. :/ 09:15, 23, 05, 2012

Re-Ups^ 20:19, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 20:13, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ChanCharm 03:51, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I think the earpink is fine, and blurred to the max. 20:18, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading. 22:18, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the dark shading around the neck, looks great! -- 11:30, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Rowan, but it's been a week. Declined due to the one week limit.

Dawnstripe (W) ~ Redone
think i'm actually proud of this considering its my first time trying these kinds of stripes :3 I wen't into this just going to change the shading but it was decided she would be redone, Hope she looks good! 20:25, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

I love it! Blur the shading. Also, this should be uploaded over File:Dawnstripe.warrior.png 20:30, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading and lowered the opacity just a bit -- 20:44, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes should be pale yellow, not white, and the base colour should be darker. 21:02, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Should match now :3 -- 21:28, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and does her eye have a pupil? o3o 21:51, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading. If I blur it anymore it will disappear. I also changed the hue of the shading. -- 16:39, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Add more of the iris (color) over the black part of her eye. ouo 22:59, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eye color/style is artist's choice. 23:05, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, Last time I colored over the lineart (Eye) I was told to put it back to normal.. I love to do the eyes and add lots of depth and color but I don't have much to work with with the warrior blank unless I go over the lineart. So I Can go over the lineart? -- 23:45, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

No, don't go over the lineart. It's fine the way you have it. 23:46 Wed May 23

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading, and changed her color to more of a yellow to match her queen, and I changed her shading color to more of a yellow. -- 00:07, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 00:27, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, you can go over eye lineart if you want, Raven. 09:08, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I went over some of the the eye lineart. Personally I think it looks much better, I think it adds more life :3 -- 13:34, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin. Skt Like a baws  14:09, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Thats really strange. The comment between Pouncey and Dazzle's comment is the most recent upload. No idea how it got there o.o -- 22:12, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, it kinda gets lost in the shading. 23:23, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

This is just my opinion, but I still find the stripes just a tiny bit white.-- 23:00, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine.

Re-uploaded -- 04:14, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya define the stripes a tad? Skt Like a baws  04:30, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Defined the stripes :3 -- 10:23, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a leeetle more? 18:44, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems fine. o3o 19:32, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. Skt Like a baws  23:06, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened the shading a tad -- 00:33, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it some more and blur it. Breeze whisker  04:55, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I really can't blur it anymore than it is now.. sorry. I darkened it though. -- 07:13, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes more. Good job. ^^ 10:38, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Defined the stripes :3 -- 11:16, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Q) ~ Tweaked
Well, even though it's listed as a redo, all I really did was slap on some more shading. I'll do a total redo if needed, but...*shrugs*. 09:56, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I think a total redo would be good, so long as you keep the same style. The shading's pretty blotchy. 13:57, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made some adjustments, but the pattern's the same for the most part. 22:06, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Can you blur the stomach shading? 22:08, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading. Skt Like a baws  22:13, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:15, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading. o3o 01:35, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:12, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly "highlight" and/or blur the shading. It looks a bit flat. 15:28, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ew highlights. x.x 22:47, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) ~ Redone
The reasons are on the nomination page. -lazy- OAs be Mosswisker&Stealthfire with a tweak by Silver. Skt Like a baws 00:59, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blah, his nose... xP Define the shading 83  01:38, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like to think he licks it up. 8D Skt Like a baws  01:51, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading and blur the earpink. <3 -- jack  never let go,   diane ❤''' 18:24, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Morningstar (L)- Tweaked
OA was the ever talented and dearly missed Night Shine. He was nominated for shading issues. I realize that there is waste, I'm gonna go ahead and take care of that now. When you don't see waste on the left sde (his right) then you'll know I've taken care of it. 04:13, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the chest and tail shading a bit? ^^  15:01, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the haunch shading a bit. <3 16:22, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like he's missing a pixel on his right eye. 22:48, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Morningstar's description isn't accurate. Someone used an image from BotC, but we don't know it's him... sorry, guys.

Lichenfur (Alt. Lo) ~ Tweaked
Yup, added underbite. OA was moi. Comments? 04:21 Mon May 28

Quite lovely. Could you maybe get rid of that line that goes from right behind the tooth to the bottom of the jaw? Unless that's a whisker or something. Breeze whisker  04:26, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

It's a whisker, the lineart got all weird looking when I made the jaw but I'm not sure how to fix it without thickening the whisker. 04:37 Mon May 28

That looks like an Overbite.. I thought an underbite is when the lower jaw is further back than the upper jaw? -- 14:54, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

No, underbite is when the "under", or lower jaw ticks out. Over is when the top jaw does. :) 15:37, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe you could get rid of the bottom whisker, cause it looks like it's growing right by her jaw. O.o Skt Like a baws  21:41, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Merp I don't know if I should edit the lineart o.o 21:42 Mon May 28

Meh, the whisker is probably fine. Maybe move the tooth forward so that you can get rid of a few black pixels behind it. It'd probably look better without the lines being connected. Breeze whisker  00:03, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:14 Tue May 29

Poppyfrost (W)~ Tweaked


She needed shading to be defined, and i blurred the bottom of her ear-pink a bit, it wasn'ts as blurred as the rest, and there was a transparent thing on her tail, so i fixed that to. OA was sandstar12, with a redo by Iceheart22. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 07:08, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define it a ton more. I can still barely see it. 15:26, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Upload this over the original file; don't create another. 15:56, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better, Paleh? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:36, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

No.... it still needs to be defined more. And reupload over the old file. 23:06, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

This still isn't the right file name. And her far back paw's shading is too dark. 23:07, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I did, i found the old file(The one that was redone by Iceheart) and and darkened that shading. Let me check.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:14, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well then replace the image up top with that one  23:18, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

-Shakes head- Appernetly, i didn't even though i went to Iceheart's page, and saved it...huh. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:19, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Let's try this again. Renamed the file(Again), darkened shading more, and lightened her back foot. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:26, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (E) ~ Tweaked
Needed an under bite =3 Comments? 12:59, May 28, 2012 (UTC) Forgot to fix the jaw.. I'll fix that soon. 15:06, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe give the tooth some shading (for lack of a better word) by darkening the two bottom pixels on the tooth? ^^;; 15:36, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

That's not really an underbite. Her lower jaw should be sticking out, like her loner. 00:10, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know, that's why I said I would fix the jaw up there o3o I failed Dx  21:39, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Her chin looks a little flat, could you curve it? 23:06, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (E) - Tweaked
She needed to be darker (finally)... OA was Hawktalon. 23:01, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad... possibly. 03:02, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. If anyone else disagrees, I will. 21:18, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) - Tweaked
Graykit. ouo Tweaked to make darker...The latest OA was Misty, but there was also Cinder, Pantherstorm, and Brightheart345. Comments? owo  ☾    T    w    e    e    ☽   Cannonsinthedistance~ 23:40, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe just a liiiittle darker? 01:59, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it a leeetle too? 21:25, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (K) ~ Redone
Redone because her kit image's stripes/coloring etc just didn't match her other images. Also, should I know the OA when its a redo? 03:21, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 03:31, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded x.x sorry, trying to match the color more to the other images. -- 03:35, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading. Darken it? Breeze whisker  04:00, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Should be able to see the shading now X3 -- 04:48, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 07:26, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Found something I needed to fix. -- 11:23, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little more. 21:35, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded took the earpink straight from the warrior, and I defined it more. -- 00:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (W) ~ Tweaked
OMG YESH I've been wanting to kill his shading forever! OA was me and Leafstrike added the pale paws. I redid the shading (copied and pasted Leopardstar's shading and recolored it red) to make him more gold and less brown. I added a pale chest to go with the pale paws better but I can take it out, Stone agreed to changing the kit. 04:38 Tue May 29

The shading kinda makes the stripes blend together. Maybe put it on a multiply layer type, if you don't already? Breeze whisker  04:47, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Epic <3 Could make the earpink a bit less neon? It could be my lap top though. -- 04:51, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried x.x 04:57 Tue May 29

Define the shading and lighten the stripes. 14:16, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, but yes, define the shading. And blur the earpink a bit, and maybe make it less purpley-gray and more red. 14:41, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (TC) (Q) ~ Tweaked
Shading tweak. OA of the most recent version is me.

Robinwing (TC) (W) ~ Tweaked
Shading tweak, as well as other tiny little things I noticed while working on the image. OA of the most recent version is me.

Define the shading. 22:43, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (E) - Redone
I think this looks like a tortoiseshell. These are harder than I though. XP Anyway, redone to look dappled. I dunno, would a more calico style cat fit the description better? Breeze whisker  00:39, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart (D) ~ Redone
Shellheart! I wish he didn't die a slow death. D8 Anyways, it needed to be redone due to shading issues and needed to match his deputy a bit more. Comments for improvement? 00:58, May 30, 2012 (UTC)