Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes and make the ear-pink a bit redder 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The furry effect needs to be smudged an blurred, and perhaps lightened. It looks like tabby stripes on the brown. 06:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't smudge it, because it's smudged to the limit; but it has been blurred. The earpink will remain untouched, since it's from the warrior. 16:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brown's too dark and the furry texture still looks like stripes. 00:30, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Which brown? The main one, or the texture brown? 18:17, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

I believe she is talking about the main brown. 00:29, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

I got the main brown from the image, but I'll fix the fur texture in a little while. 19:10, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:19, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

The brown in general looks much too dark. It looks near black. Lighten it. 01:13, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture a little bit more, and erase some so that more of the base white is visiable~ 01:58, 30, 06, 2012

Perhaps remove a little bit of it, like stated above, but make it more transparent as well to give the shaded look. 17:25, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:18, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase some of the texture on parts that are highlighted more. Like, erase it a lot, so that only a little is showing. It will add a lot more depth and shading. Breeze whisker  17:42, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded After messing with it for awhile, I think I got what you were saying 8D. 23:33, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still seems kinda flat...try and define it, please.

Reuploaded The chest shading looks like the way it does because of the texture... o3o. 00:01, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

She kind of looks like she's squinting because of her eyes..17:07, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:40, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. It just looks....weird. 23:50, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine. Skt Omnia vincit amor  00:02, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

The fur texture doesn't really match the warrior's. Could you fix that? =3 00:13, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more and the brown still doesn't match. 05:19, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up up the shading on the shoulder. Breeze whisker  04:48, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks to Trolly for helping me with the texture/how she did it. 16:41, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to have the fur texture go with the fur? Like sideways? 16:43, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Ki) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading. Changes might not be showing, and I personally believe it could be blended a bit more. x3 OA was Sunleap. Comments? 06:54, 28, 06, 2012

I believe someone forgot to add it when they put this on the tweaks needing to be done list, but this also needed to be darkened to match her other images. also, dull the highlights. 11:21, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Yeah I'm not very fond of this image. :P 06:05, 29, 06, 2012

Can you make the earpink less red and more pink? 00:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I took the color off the warrior image now. 03:01, 30, 06, 2012

Blur the shading some more some more, or lighten it. Breeze whisker  17:39, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Urgh, that shading. 07:48, 02, 07, 2012

Can you define the shading just a tad? 15:40, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Waste is a lie. 03:24, 04, 07, 2012

Blur the highlights. 21:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  01:48, 05, 07, 2012

Darken it more. 10:27, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Now I'm unsure of wheither it matches. 03:17, 06, 07, 2012

Rosepetal (W) - Tweaked
She needed to be brought back to the color she was before to match her other images, and actually be dark cream. I need to fix some shading, I know. I'll do that in the next upload. Breeze whisker  21:26, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, define it, and make it more triangular. 22:16, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe tinge the shading browner/redder. She looks kinda ashy/gray. 00:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. (Yes, the highlights are tinted green.) Breeze  whisker  00:56, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the base just a tad? It doesn't quite match the other two images.

Make the earpink more triangular and a tad smaller. 01:03, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/redden the ear-pink 03:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's all I'm going to do with the earpink. Breeze whisker  17:37, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and perhaps make it thinner around the back area. 21:01, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading along her back looks fine...but maybe define the shading on her legs a tad? 01:18, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  04:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add a bit more shading to the back of her head and ears? 16:22, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Needed ragged fur (Changes may not be showing yet) Ohgawd I killed it Comments? 01:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. -- 16:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the ragged-ness? O_o Maybe make it match her queen? 16:22, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, wouldn't her fur be a bit more ragged as both a loner and rogue, probably from the fighting, and all of that?

True, but I think it could be toned down just a tad. XD Skt Omnia vincit amor 20:18, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 04:47, 01, 07, 2012

Blur the tail shading. Nice job, Stoner. 21:00, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Wait - should I tone down the furriness or not? I dunno...but I kinda think that the queen has a little bit of raggedness... 23:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know, but it makes more sense for her to be fluffier when she's outside a Clan and doesn't care about her appearance. I think it should stay... 23:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should tone it down just a tad. Yes she'd be more ragged outside the Clan, but this is going a bit overboard. 22:10, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the fur looks fine, I've even seen strays that look like that. -- 18:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Ok, before anyone says anything, the original shading on Cinderpelt's first kit made the new shading really hard to blur, so I just redid it all together. Recent OA was Iceheart. 15:09, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry...but It was nominated for a tweak, the vote passed, and so it should be a tweak.... *shrug* 17:40, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I got permission from a SW before I redid it (Trolleh.) But if it needs to be tweaked, then I'll simply tweak it. 18:34, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, if you had permission, I guess. 18:33, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken, thicken, and blur the shading. Blur the ear-pink. Excellent job, though. 20:56, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are not showing, but if they are the older image doesn't look scaled. 19:16, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and define the rest. (If I am looking at the correct version) 01:50, 03, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 22:28, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs and tail. 03:25 Thu Jul 5

Reuploaded 17:16, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ratscar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
All I did was add the torn ear and scar, of which came from the warrior. OA was Silver. Comments?  11:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and make it more pinkish? It looks gray right now. 15:36, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:53, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to complain about something that you just fixed, but could you redden the earpink? It looks too pale to me.... but the rest of this image is positively beautiful, really! :) 00:01, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

If it gets anymore red then it will be hard to see against the base coat. I think it's fine. 03:24 Thu Jul 5

Re-uploaded Thickened the scar...I thought it didn't match the warrior's very well o3o  11:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken it a bit more? :3 03:30, 06, 07, 2012

Cherrypaw (TC) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be longhaired. Sorry I just realized a small part got cut off. Don't worry, Ivypool is next. Low battery, sorry. 21:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on her chest. 22:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Her tail looks sorta flat...could you define/remove some shading...or add a "highlight"? OwO 22:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the body shading. <span style="">03:59, 04, 07, 2012

I say while this is up, the ear-pink closest to us should be blurred a bit, (Unless its my lap top). -- 08:57, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random black dot on her right paw... 00:02, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

That random black dot is lineart. However it does seem to be too thick. <span style="">02:15, 05, 07, 2012

Reuploaded Well, I managed to find her old .xcf so I redid what I've already previously done with this tweak. In all honesty, it makes me life tons easier. And if this is the correct version, then yes I see the waste and I fully intend to kill it  02:25, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked for jacked up ears and a shading tweak. I hate how the new shading looks, she looks silver now. I might redo the ears and everything when I get ahold of my flashdrive. Meh. 21:43, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a bit?

There's some waste leaking out of the ears. 22:19, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading. 22:19, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes aren't showing. Alright, I found the old .xcf file, which means I had to redo getting rid of the blurred lineart and redoing the sliced ears (which I wasn't happy with them anyway). However, old .xcf means a better way of defining the shading ^^  01:50, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ro) - Tweaked
OA was Paleh, and she needed to be... floofy? I dunno. Ohgawd why do I fail so much. 22:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

If we decided that the loners ragged fur had to be toned down, then this should probably too. o3o <span style="">02:19, 05, 07, 2012

Twist (R) ~ Tweaked
The most recent OA was some sexy person. 8D I just had to tweak the facial stripes and I wanted to saturate the ginger some more. x3 04:30, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

can you make the ginger more gingery? It looks brown ._. 04:58, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes on her face just a tiinnny bit? And maybe define the orange brown markings, (Unless its the lighting on my lap top). Looks Epic! :3 08:52, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reploaded. I ended up redoing the ginger to make it stand out more. I like this pattern better. x3 02:13, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mistyheart, with a failed tweak by me. I re-did the shading, because let's face it; that last one sucked.

If you redid the shading on a solid cat..... how's it tweaked. 0.o 01:18, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Oh it was your image. Nevermind. Blur the shading then. 01:19, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

And add a light source. 01:28, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ....

Thrushpelt (W) - Tweaked
It looks redone, but I swear on my life that it isn't. Anyways, OA was Sandy with a re-do by me, and I redid the white patch, shading, fixed the earpink, and I added a fur texture. don't kill me, I like the texture  Comments for improvement? 22:21, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste under his butt. 22:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up th:e texture just a tad and define it on his tail. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:03, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded:  01:07, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the fur texture more? It seems like he is two colors now. 01:57, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also make the actual lines for the fur smaller and add more? He looks mottled to me  02:39, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) ~ Redone
Willowpelt! In icon for half of the wwiki shippings! ...Anyway redone because of blotchy shading. OA was Leaf-storm and someone before but I don't know. Comments? 01:01 Fri Jul 6

Blur and lighten the shading. 01:05, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes might not be showing. 01:17 Fri Jul 6

Blur the earpink just a tad. Lovely~ 01:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D 01:38 Fri Jul 6

Blur the shading a liiittle bit. 01:39, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Photoshop won't let me blur it anymore :/ 01:43 Fri Jul 6

Can you lighten the tail shading a little, please? 02:38, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Kinda new to this shading style x.x 02:47 Fri Jul 6

Smooth out that area between the front and hind leg. If it won't let you blur it anymore, try alternating between a very soft brush and eraser. Breeze whisker  04:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:21 Fri Jul 6

Heavystep (A) - Tweaked
Ugh. This is frustrating me so much. I just cannot make this guy look three-dimensional. Anyway, I tweaked his shading to make it look less flat. I tried to smudge the stipes more to match the other images better, but that just looked worse. Comments would be much appreciated. ;n; Breeze  whisker  04:35, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a bit more. All hail Heavystep~

Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Bleh I fails right now x.x I gave him shaggy fur. Cloudy sent me the file and told me to kill the shading. Comments? 07:24 Fri Jul 6

Blur the face shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 14:10, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:25 Fri Jul 6

Blur the shading on his neck. 20:49, July 6, 2012 (UTC)