Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Gorseclaw (TC) (Star) ~ Redone
Redone to match Tigerstar

I can't quite tell, but does this have texture? The other images don't have them, so I'm not sure this should either.

I think the texture is ok on these ones if only because he wasn't said to be identical, like how spottedpelt isn't exactly the same looking as spottedleaf. 00:13, July 5, 2018 (UTC)

But that was part of the issue last time, if they're said to look alike, they should have the same features. I'm not trying to be rude, but I'm trying to prevent this from being nominated again in the future.

as long as eveything else matches, imo it should be okay because striking =/= exactly the same. 00:19, July 5, 2018 (UTC)

I think the texture should be removed. "Striking" in the term that Firestar uses is to comment on how alike the two looked, and instantly thought of Tigerstar. Sure, they do not have to be identical, but I really think that the texture should be removed to make them look more alike. 14:42, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

By your standards, Spottedpelt should definitely be redone, because they don’t look extremely similar (to your standards). In fact, they have quite a lot of differences in their art, way more than what these images have. Also, the meaning of resemblance doesn’t mean identical. Even if Gorseclaw reminded Firestar of Tigerstar, that doesn’t equate to them being identical, they can look similar, and honestly it doesn’t even need to be that similar. I can even see a random ginger cat and be reminded of Firestar, honestly. But, we are redoing this based on the “striking resemblance” comment, not the reminder. And again, striking resemblance doesn’t mean identical.

Also, this looks extremely similar to Tigerstar regardless of whether it has texture or not. The only thing that I made different on this image was the fact that I added extremely light texture, on 50% opacity or something. I seriously don’t see how it affects their similarity in a significant way. If I remove it, they would be completely identical and honestly, it wouldn’t affect them much. (Judging from Snowed’s first comment, they could barely tell I had it in the first place. Sorry if that’s a wrong interpretation)

I’m not removing it unless you can convince me that it was referring to them being identical, not just a resemblance. Or if you can convince me that the difference (which is far, far less than Spottedpelt and Spottedleaf, by the way. Spotted pelt doesn't even have the white flecks that Spottedleaf does, which is way more noticeable than light texture) is significant enough. Or unless we all redo Spottedpelt to make her completely identical, because frankly they are not and they have a lot of differences. Again, I stress that Gorseclaw and Tigerstar look way more similar than Spottedpelt and Spottedleaf do. If these look that different from Tigerstar then you should be questioning Spottedpelt as well.

I apologize in advance if I came across as rude, as I’m pretty tired right now.

these appear to be missing some starclan eye lineart on > that side. 01:54, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I got it?

Fritz (RP) (Ki) - Redone
wasn't really sure whether or not to give him a collar, since it seems to be a debate we've always had and we don't know he had a collar as a kit.

Fritz (RP) (KP) - Redone
Barring eye color and shading, everything else is exactly the same as Mitzi; I said I was going to use the same file and redo the shading+eye color.

I know it’s difficult, but could you try to smooth out the shading on the collar? Good job :) 03:17, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

That's the same collar shading that Mitzi has. All I redid was the body shading and eye color.

can you maybe define the body shading a bit? 00:40, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ Tweaked
21:40, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded felt like she was a little dark 00:39, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Gorseclaw (TC) (K) ~ Redone
Redone to match Tigerstar

Comment from the star applies here as well. 14:52, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

Snail Shell (W) - Redone
OA was Spooky 14:49 Sat Jul 7

Soften the specks just a little bit? I'd offer the file, but it got zapped a while back while I was cleaning my old laptop. ;;;;

Reuploaded You're good, Jayce! 15:19 Sat Jul 7

Hoot (Le) ~ Tweaked
Latest OA was Snowfall, tweaked for a torn ear. Comments? 17:26, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

Jumper (Le) ~ Tweaked
Latest OA was Spooky, tweaked for torn ears. Comments? 17:26, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

might be shot but the black around the eyes extends down too far here compared to barley and hoot. 00:41, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. 00:48, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

oh the nose should also be pink. forgot to mention that 03:12, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:19, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Jumper (Lo) ~ Redone
I'll soften the black later. 03:24, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Don't forget the nicked ears! :) 06:34, July 8, 2018 (UTC)