Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

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=Images Pending Approval=

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Applefur (W) ~ For Approval
Ah, what a fresh new day in PCA. Comments? 00:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe sharpen the mottles on her midriff? 00:34, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Icy on this one. Perhaps make them slightly less like texture as well?

re-up I tried (remember this is my first mottle) ;__; 00:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the mottles just a bit more? They kind of look like texture or highlights at the moment. ( teach me how to mottle this is hawt ) 13:37 Sat May 17

re-up 13:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) ~ CBA
Still going with 'er. Comments? 00:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail, leg and belly shading a touch? Dazzling, as always with Beebs's chararts c: 00:14, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 00:20, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Can you blur the brown spot on her tail? And possible define the shading that goes from her shoulders downwards. Very pretty. 00:35, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 00:41, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The brown spot could be blurred a teensy bit moer at the base. 00:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up It's actually the tail shading, but close enough? 00:46, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Looks pretty accurate comparing to her warrior image. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:48, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

There wasn't much wrong with this the first time it was up, and I see nothing this time around. Let's go for the first official CBA, shall we?

Willow (Ki) ~ For Approval
she's cute; I am so happy 00:08, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her right arm and her stomach (or blur it, whatever looks better) and possibly the shading on her forehead. 00:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes aren't showing yet; see here 23:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval
here we are 00:08, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading 00:32, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes may not be showing 23:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Star) - For Approval
RIP my darling, for I think you were killed far too early for my liking. All colors are from her other images.

Maybe add some depth to her non shaded parts? 00:31, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Don't know if this is helpful or not, but I'd maybe lighten up the eyes a little, perhaps? eek i'm not good at critique i'm sorry   notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

What do you mean? I don't normally use highlights, Icy, and I'd rather not add any for this one. Any other alternative suggestions? Should I define the shading or something like that instead? As for the eyes, they're colorpicked from her other images.

Sorry I'm terrible at explaining but like, maybe define the shading is probably a better word for it. 00:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Okay I wasn't sure sorry notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I goofed up on this...

I think it looks pretty accurate. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  14:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Star) ~ For Approval
Richard Nixon. 00:38, 17, 05, 2014

Possibly blur the spots on her flank a bit more? Looks nice. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thank you friend 8D 00:47, 17, 05, 2014

Good! notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC) I can't think of much else, anyone got something I'm missing?

Could you define the head shading just a bit? Jeez, her pattern is madness.

Shimmerpelt (Queen) - For Approval
Wow, I've wanted to redo this for a while and I'm not happy about the tail..

Possibly lighten shading and/or highlight a bit? I'm having trouble seeing the lineart. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  14:45, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The pelt color is straight from her other images, and because she's described as night-black, I'd prefer to keep her this dark if no one minds? Of course, I'll gladly change it if others disgree with me.

Blur the tail shading a bit? It looks really thick and unblurred compared to the rest of the shading. Don't blur/smudge it to the left, do that to the right. It just needs to cover her tail a bit more and show it has shape to it. Blurring/smudging to the right should do that. c: 19:32, 05/17/2014

Re-uploaded.

Ashfoot (Queen) - For Approval
First charart of approval started.. Sorry I don't know what I said. Anyway this is my first charart for approval, comments? :D -- Night Wolfy Moon  02:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur and add more depth to the shading. It looks quite flat. Love those eyes <3> 2:35 Sat May 17

Re-uploaded I made the shading a bit darker too. And thank you. The eyes are always my specialty :D -- Night Wolfy Moon   12:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Try defining the shading around the belly, it still looks a bit flat. Trunktail 15:50, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the back leg closest to us. The belly shading is fine- if anything, it just needs a little bit of blurring. Perhaps lighten the shading around the shoulder/head/chest to match the rest of the image (sorry for nitpickin g) 10:08 Sun May 18

Tom (KP) ~ For Approval
Here's Tom. Not exactly my favorite character. Comments? 03:10, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading a bit, but they do look pretty neat.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 03:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and darken it a bit.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 16:28, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Emberkit (DotC) (StarClan Kit) - For Approval
Not sure if I'm doing this right, but I drew Emberkit. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 03:57, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Woah, this is good for a first charart! The stripes seem to fade into the shading. Maybe define 'em some more? 03:59, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The file name should be File:Emberkit (DotC).star.png. Would you like me to rename it for you? All you'd have to do is continue reuploading under the renamed file, since we have naming conversions that we use here with our various images and templates and pages and such. This is amazing, Jayfrost!

Thanks Bbunlegs. :) I darkened the stripes a bit, hopefully they're more defined now. And thanks Snowed Lightning. I uploded it with a new image, and I followed the naming thing this time. I'll try to remember that. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I just realized I only tacked on the .star bit, I forgot the rest of the changes. Um. Sorry about that. Would you mind changing it? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. Just continue to reupload under the file I've named for you and you'll be good to go!

Thanks. :) Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:10, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

His chest is supposed to be white, correct? Is there any way you could make it more white? If not, that's okay with me. As for the eyes, I can't quite see where the whites are supposed to be..unless that's just me being blind. I'm sorry I'm being nitpicky- this is a wonderful image for your first charart on here.

I made the white on the chest and the white in the eyes stand out a bit more. Is that better? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:32, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Mmhmm. That looks quite a bit better to me. I'm really impressed with this so I'm gonna change the heading to "For Approval" and promote you to apprentice, since it's completely obvious you already know what you're doing.

Oh, wow. Thanks! :D Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:38, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Looks really good, Jay! Possibly define the eye color a bit more, I'm not sure it it's just me, but the color looks a bit flat. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  14:34, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Edited, tried to make the eye color stand out a bit more. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 15:31, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The "black" part of the eye could be darker. 15:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Edited, tried to make the pupil stand out more. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 16:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, for some reaosn, the changes don't seem to be showing up. Nevermind. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:57, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Absolutely amazing! I wish I could do charart this well (and that's coming from a warrior!). The muzzle, his left foreleg (the one on our right, and just at the shoulder) and eye lineart seems a bit blurred, and maybe lighten the shading on the chest near the legs and belly; the white looks a little gray. 23:00, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! :D I sharpened the outline, and I lightened the shading on the belly and legs a bit. Better? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 01:51, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Frog (Cat) (Ki) - For Approval
My first character art in a while, this time of Frog. Comments? Trunktail (talk) 13:18, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Removed thumbnail. The title should also be either 'Frog (Cat) (Ki) - For Approval' or 'For Evaluation' ( sorry its late and I'm not sure ) Anyway, I can't see a real light source, so define it, perhaps. This is really neat! c: <span style="">13:44 Sat May 17

Re-Uploaded. Is this better? <font color="34282C">Trunktail 14:14, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Frog (Cat).kit.png. Would you like me to rename it for you?

Yes please :3 <font color="34282C">Trunktail 15:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. There you go! Maybe define the tail shading a teeny bit?

Re-uploaded. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 15:48, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste outside of --> ear.

Re-uped -- <font color="34282C">Trunktail 17:46, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (W) ~ For Approval
nyan nyan <span style="">15:21 Sat May 17

Maybe lighten the shading a bit? Also, she looks a bit pupil-less, unless that was intentional? Other than that I can't see any problems with it. -- <font color="34282C">Trunktail 15:47, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Shading darkness is artist's choice, unless it's too light.

I'd also rather nor change the eyes. That's how I do them. <span style="">16:17 Sat May 17

Meadowslip (Q) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">16:23, 05/17/2014

Define the foreleg shading. 16:24, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reups. Defined the shading on her tail, too. <span style="">16:40, 05/17/2014

Whitethroat (Star) - For Approval
I'm not sure about how good this is, the earpink took FOREVER to get shaped right, any comments/questions/ideas? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:16, May 17, 2014 (UTC) (yay, first charart in 3 years!)

Define the shading and eye depth, as well as add some white to his chest. 17:18, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up (did it upload right?) <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:26, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

As for eyes, do you want me to darken the dark and lighten the light? I took the color from his warrior image... <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 17:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading and maybe thin out that white patch on his throat/chest area by a couple pixels on each side.

Re-Up. Does it look any different? I'm having problems with the file itself... <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:46, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 17:51, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Tried to make the earpink a bit more like the other's I've seen, did I do it? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:57, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

That's better, but there's some waste on the ear. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 18:16, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Got it! (right?) Thanks, I wouldn't have noticed it otherwise <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  18:21, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it has updated for me yet, but I can still see some waste. Also, could you bring the white on his chest up a bit higher. His other chararts have it going up to his chin. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 18:35, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Looks a little odd to me... is it just me again? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  18:47, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The file needs to be named File:Whitethroat.star.png in order to go with the templates and pages. Please go back to the other file and then you can just reupload over what's already there.

Re-Up: Did I rename it right? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  19:02, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Nope. See the blue link I gave you? Use that filename and just reupload over it.

Okay, I think I got it THIS time. Is there anything else I could do to tweak it? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  19:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's still waste outside of his left ear. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 20:23, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Waste should be gone now. <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  20:31, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Add a little more depth to his eyes. 01:06, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his middle. <span style="">10:11 Sun May 18

Moon Shadow (Star) ~ For Approval
I'm not proud of this the shading is bothering me. But I did remove the waste, changes are just being a pain in the butt. 17:17, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Those eyes are amazing ~<3 <span style="">18:43 Sat May 17

Dew (Ro) ~ For Approval
I had no idea what it is meant by "splotchy, so I did a splotchy pattern and splotchy fur. I'm sorry Snowed of Lightning I couldn't hold back. Comments? <span style="">18:43 Sat May 17

It's fine, Hawk, my goodness. I think the splotchy-ness is good how it is, actually. Maybe give the ears a little more of a notch? They look like they're cut off..

Re-uploaded. <span style="">19:31 Sat May 17

Re-uploaded. Forgot a pixel <span style="">19:34 Sat May 17

Nightwing (Q) - For Approval
New blank. Comments? <span style="">19:23, 05/17/2014

Blur the stomach shading a bit. Lookin' niiiice. <span style="">10:13 Sun May 18

Poppydawn (Q) - For Approval
Here we go again… 22:55, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her right foreleg and left back leg? Pretty! 02:25, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Runningnose (Le) ~ CBA
ayyy 01:03, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Needs a gray muzzle. 03:24, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded grey muzzles are the enemy 05:07, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

This looks great, David. CBA? <span style="">10:00 Sun May 18

Millie (Q) ~ For Approval
this pattern has caused pain in my hand argrrgrhh but at least its done 10:17, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around the front paws. .o. She looks gorgeous <span style="">10:34 Sun May 18