Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Cinderpelt (MCA) ~ Redone
Help me... OAs were several artists, I think the most recent was Beebs. I have failed... 18:58, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? 19:01, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reups. ''' 19:05, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Can you make the smoke match mine a bit more? This is great! 19:14, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Define the smoke a bit more and define the texture. Do you want the file, or did I already give it to you? 19:54, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Reups no, I'm okay, thanks. And danke, Hawk. 21:13, October 7, 2013 (UTC)

The smoke needs to be smudged with a smaller brush, as it looks clumpy in comparison to the StarClanner. I also used a 1px brush for this. 02:44, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

There's also smoke on the paws and the back of her legs on the StarClanner, too. I can't tell if you've added it or not. 02:44, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 17:21, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm, it seems like the way you smudged is like, straight rather than curved with the body. how do you do this stuff all on pixlr?! 07:03 Wed Oct 9

I think it's fine, really. 14:47, October 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think the texture could be curved to fit the shoulders and haunch a bit more. 04:33, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 17:08, October 10, 2013 (UTC)

Curve it a little more along the shoulder, and define/add smoke along her upper lip. 14:41, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 15:59, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

Did you forget to fill the nose? 😝 05:46 Mon Oct 14

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
OA be me, tweaked for color. Comments? 20:28, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

This is way, way past 24, but both images look more red than pinkish... Or it may be just my iPad. 02:14 Mon Oct 14

Well, she's supposed to be pinkish-orange so, I think it looks fine o3o 02:40, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

Rosetail (W) ~ Tweaked
OA be me, same reason as above. Comments? 20:28, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

Look above^^ sorry for interrupting. 02:15 Mon Oct 14

Same as above, I don't think it looks reddish 02:40, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (W) - Redone
OA was me, redoing because of unnatural pattern. I made two and I'd like to see which one you guys would prefer. Comments? 11:54, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

I would prefer the one on the right, but that's just me. -shrugs- Also, I think that you have to be a member to tweak  or redo an image. x3 13:40, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

She does, but that can very easily be changed. Loonie, if you want me to add you back in, I can do that.

Ah whoops, sorry about that x.x Forgot the rules. Please and thank you~! 14:15, October 12, 2013 (UTC)

I prefer the one on the right. Can you define the tail shading? 02:22 Mon Oct 14

Re-uploaded. Changes probably aren't showing. 15:33, October 14, 2013 (UTC)