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Storm (Ro) (Ki) - For Approval
This probably doesn't match well. 19:47, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, shading depth, and smooth the shading a bit.

Reuploaded 20:09, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It might just be me but she looks tinted yellow compared to the other images. 20:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

^^I see the yellow tint too.

Reuploaded I put a shading tint on the image. (if that's what you're talking about) Sorry, I should have said something about that. 21:14, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on her other images seem more... Clustered, for the lack of a better word. If you'd like, I can try and dig up the file for the ES. (Though my attempt at matching her pattern is pretty bad hh)

In between the thick tail stripes should be very thin, hardly noticeable stripes, i think.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better. :) And Fox, you don't have to dig the file out, you probably have so many other files and my computer doesn't load email anyway. 01:51, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the face and chest? Also, do you think you could curve the neck shading rather than having it be sort of a straight line, if that makes sense? 01:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

awww she's so cute (he?) ((: a suggestion is maybe u could extend the stripes to the empty area on the right hand side? cuz there should be stripes on her haunch area. 04:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Gah this is so hard to explain *.* but I feel like the stripes on her other images aren't as... Messy? Like they seem to form a more orderly pattern, if you get me. There also appears to be texture on her other images, so that also needs to be added.

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt. :) Hopefully this is close to what you meant, Fox. :D 00:35, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 23:36, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:45, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and smooth the bit of shading on the flank thing next to the -> arm

Reuploaded 21:55, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading between the front legs. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:59, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:27, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the <- arm and smooth it out a little?

Reuploaded  17:10, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more on the neck and face. 23:50, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:35, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes there 08:52, 7/30/2017

Reuploaded :) 20:16, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear to be a bit softer on the other images, also perhaps define the stripes under the shading? + smooth the shading on the ear

Reuploaded 18:17, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

doesnt she have a pale muzzle too? 21:16, 8/05/2017

Reuploaded It was already there but I defined it. :P 03:25, August 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the earpink a tad 21:09, 8/08/2017

Reuploaded 00:21, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading

Reuploaded Second time using layers! I messed around with some stuff and got this. They're magical. 17:00, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the head shading? 15:42, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:57, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

There appears to be waste above the tail, around the paws, and around the head and ears. I'd also suggest lightening the shading a bit and then adding (or darkening) the depth to make it more of a gradient

Define shading on tail. Smooth out shading everywhere, also. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:02, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the pattern underneath the shading 18:39, 8/16/2017

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Yes, I know the tail shading is horrible. I'll redo it later.

DOesn't she need texture, or does she not because she's a altErmineGlow (talk) 16:01, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

I think that since this is based off the manga, it shouldn't have texture. Although I'm not sure.

Can you recede the shading on the chest, then a little on the haunch? I just feel like it covers a bit too much with this source. I also think the shading needs to be smoothed out in order to add more depth :)

The farther front paw needs to be white, as shown in the manga. 16:38 Fri Aug 4

re-up Nope. Nope nope nope.

The shading it leaking a bit on the haunch and on the closest back leg. 17:48, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading to give it more of a gradient-style look. Unless you're going for a smudged look? Which in that case, you should probably have smudged all of the shading, not just the edges. It cuts off a bit too abruptly and then changes to an all block-y look.

Define shading depth? 23:25, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Uh, Skye I'm not quite following? Sorry if I sound like an idiot but I'm not understanding what you want me to do.

i think she wants you to smooth the shading Star 02:04, 8/05/2017

I know that, but I'm going for that smudged look, and smudged shading is really hard for me. Like what does it mean to smudge all the shading?

I'm sorry, that was phrased badly and I was tired as hell earlier. Smudging all the shading means not just the edges. With this image, there's the edges of the shading, and then where it abruptly changes to what seems to be a solid darker gray coloring. You see on this file of mine? Like how it's smudged throughout the entire shading layer, instead of just the edges? I mean try something like that.

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define the shading depth 17:33, 8/05/2017

also, define the earpink better 21:17, 8/05/2017

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Could you define the shading depth on the tail? 19:22, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe smudge the belly shading? Just that really dark bit near the front leg?

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maybe fix the tail shading, as it appears to be very blotchy 19:59, 8/07/2017

Okay but, the tail on this blank is so small and shading it right is difficult so imo it looks just fine but if someone else agrees with broken then ignore this lmao

I think the tail shading's all right, but the shading on the chest and haunch could be smoothed out a little more. 00:48, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

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Define shading on back legs. Also, maybe make the darker shade of the shading blend in more with the lighter shading. (If you know what I mean?) I see two different shades, or that could just be me, lol. Also smooth out the shading on the hind leg closest to us. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:55, August 11, 2017 (UTC)

re-up That's the shading depth, Cosmo. (smudged shading is difficult)

Could you smooth the shading on the haunch? Compared to the rest of the shading, it kind of cuts off abruptly rather than blending. 15:35, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

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The areas in red have shading leaking onto them, and I think the shading in green could be smoothed a bit more

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Can you smooth out the overall shading a little more? 20:55, August 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up this shading is killing me

Snail Shell (A) ~ For Approval
Wow, this piece was fun to do, and I'm pretty proud of it! Comments? 19:31, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

This is so amazing Vec! Mind smoothing out the shading right below the upper arm part on the arm closest to us, if you get what I mean. :P 23:10, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks! :D 02:33, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

This is so goooood! I thiiiink there's a tiny bit of waste outside of the closet front paw to us, but I can't tell. Maybe just check? 04:15, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

this is cool my dude. prehaps smooth the haunch shading just a lil <span style="">10:37, 8/12/2017

Reups Thanks guys! <3 @winter I didn't see any waste there, but I did find some more in other places. 17:32, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the pattern under the shading a little bit? It kind of blends in with it. 15:43, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind if I ask which pattern? The spots or the textured mess? Unless you mean both. 21:46, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

Both I guess 23:17, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 00:00, August 14, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten shading a little?

There's no texture on the kit...which is the first image in this set. it's just a bunch of small spots/flecks.

Slash (Alt. Leader) ~ For Approval
for being called gray in path of stars, which is when im almost positive he was leader of his group. <span style="">20:53, 8/11/2017

I'm almost positive you need to reserve things first... <span style="">20:59, 8/11/2017

yep, i forgot to, but i fixed it <span style="">21:02, 8/11/2017

Can you lighten the shading everywhere?

re-uploaded <span style="">21:24, 8/11/2017

I think there's some waste on ---> side of the body, just above the three clawed scar. 17:24, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have missing whiskers? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 18:14, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. <span style="">20:02, 8/12/2017

Smooth out the shading a lot more. It seems pretty rough and cuts off abruptly, when it should be more of a gradient. Lighten it a few ticks, while you're at it.

re-uploaded. terrible attempt at ibis shading <span style="">02:39, 8/14/2017

Where'd the scars go?

re-uploaded. oh yeah. <span style="">02:51, 8/14/2017

Maybe lighten the shading a little bit more? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:03, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. was at 100% for the layer thingy, now its at 93% <span style="">00:22, 8/16/2017

Echosong (Lo) ~ For Approval
She was really fun to do and her stripes were a challenge, lol. Should she have herbs in her mouth because she was still a medicine cat? Like Puddleshine was The Kin's medicine cat despite being considered a 'rogue'? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:39, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

She looks a little too purple <span style="">02:46, 8/13/2017

Re-uploaded. It was fine on my phone screen, but changed the tint a bit. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:00, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

smooth the shading <span style="">04:07, 8/13/2017

This is how I do my shading style, it's sharp. I don't want to smooth it out a lot or something. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:12, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

She still looks really purple... also, could you smooth it out a little bit? Not too much, but just enough so it doesn't look like it's cutting off......which I realize is probably a bit offensive, I apologize for horrible wording. x.x

I don't think it was offensive :) Couod you smudge the gray tail-tip a bit more? 04:56, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

in fact, mind softening all the stripes just a lil <span style="">04:58, 8/13/2017

Re-uploaded. Messed with the shading a bit. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:00, August 14, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the belly shading a little? It kinda cuts off abruptly. This is really pretty!

In my opinion, it's smooth enough. Any more, it won't flow with the rest of the shading everywhere else. Also, what do you mean "cut off"? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:04, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Smoothed it out some. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:56, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

Sandynose (Lo) - For Approval
sandy boiiiii

the muzzle looks really flat without shading, so prehaps add a tiny bit underneath the chin <span style="">18:38, 8/13/2017

reups I was just using the apprentice tutorial source but ok

Define the earpink? 19:43, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups moved it above the shading

Can you smooth out the belly & shoulder shading and that shading that curves to left from the belly shading? oh shoot I can't explain. I can circle it if you don't know what I'm talking about.

reups nah you're good. this shading hates me tho

Define the shading on all of the legs, the tail, and the facial area. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:05, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

reups guess who just realized they forgot to put any shading at all on the face

maybe reduce the darker tailtip just a little bit more? 18:06, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

reups

Honey Pelt (Alt. W) - For Approval
07:20, August 14, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define shading on the back legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:01, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :) 05:41, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

im confused as to where your light source is coming from, honestly. from what i gathered, its coning from --> but then, why would there be any light on the back leg and front leg furthest from us? <span style="">21:41, 8/16/2017

broken this light source is 100% valid and has been used on many previous chararts. <span style="">00:54, 8/17/2017

Yeah... I kinda wanted to have a little bit of light on each leg and I hope that's okay. I won't change it. I didn't think it mattered and thought it was acceptable, as it's on other chararts, like Lyokion mentioned. :) 01:09, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

Bone (D) ~ For Approval
I assume that he is supposed to have a deputy image since he is in the deputies category and has a name box for deputy. Just decline if I'm wrong. Anyways, this was really hard to do. :'> 23:08, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

we dont make assumptions here Pepper =/ as far as i remember, he isnt supposed to have a deputy image. someone correct me if im wrong though. <span style="">00:05, 8/17/2017

can u darken the black a lil? <span style="">00:53, 8/17/2017

You need to stop acting so hostile towards Pepper, Broken. A check of the article would show that, in fact, Bone does have a deputy cite, and it is valid. If we gave Scourge a leader image, then I would think that the same would apply to Bone, because he was acting as Scourge's second in command. Pepper saw a cite, didn't see an image, and made one. That's not an assumption.

Reups 01:06, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

sorry, pepper. i think you missed some of the scars on the chest <span style="">01:22, 8/17/2017

Reups Thank you for apologizing. 01:26, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

I changed it to a blue tint and smudged shading. I definitely like it more than the one before. 16:37, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading?

Oatwhisker (WC) (Star) - For Approval
He looks so much better this time lol <span style="">16:12 Thu Aug 17

Can you define and/or darken the shading?

Reuploaded His pattern makes shading so irritating lol. It ends up too light or too dark. Although I'm very happy with the hand drawn shading. <span style="">16:31 Thu Aug 17