Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 173

Parsleyseed (KP) - Approved
I'm so unbelievably proud of how this turned out tbh. (also, was very anxious of someone reserving this before I could get to it) 17:21, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I know the feeling, snek. Define shading on face?

reups 17:31, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I believe on the other images there's some creamy parts above the eyes. Looking good! 19:06, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups 19:26, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I'm fairly sure that there's some paler parts (only slightly paler, mind you) not he front legs, underbelly, back two paws, and underside of the tail. They appear on both images in the same spots, so I'm pretty sure it's that and not a highlight

his other images look a lot lighter than this. 19:47, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I already had paler parts and most of the ones you mention wouldn't be visible, spooky. Also, I colorpicked from the apprentice image, so it's the same colors. 19:48, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

colourpick doesn't mean the colours are totally accurate. he's too dark, and I even have the file foe the apprentice, if you want it. 19:50, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I tried colorpicking from a lighter part of the image, is this okay? 20:02, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the muzzle should have more pale parts as well as the eyes. 20:44, 4/15/2017

reups The eyes match the other images just fine, but I defined the cream a bit anyways. The muzzle matched the warrior, but I changed it to better fit the apprentice image. 21:15, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the secondary pale parts on the haunch. On the warrior, you can see how it goes from a pale part, to another shade, then to the base color. It's on the apprentice too, just less visible because of that shading source. Also, define them on the belly ad well. The warrior shows them to stretch out quite a bit, so even though the belly doesn't show much on this blank, there would still be some.

reups 23:50, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

The colors still seem a bit off.. why not just get the file with the actual colors instead of colorpicking? Jayie's shading method almost always has tinted shading, and she also uses highlights, which is bound to throw off the colors, even with the lighter areas.

reups Everything is now the exact same hex code as the apprentice, plus I added some highlights to better match the apprentice. (I actually had to redo this, my computer shut down for an update before I could save :^)))) 22:57, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more 20:27, 4/17/2017

reups 22:28, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the facial color not match the rest of his image? 00:11, 4/18/2017

Its the exact same color, Winter 00:37, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

I hate to be that guy but it honestly is still too dark. I've provided you with a picture of what the differences are (excuse the poor mouse handwriting). The face color is a different color than the rest of the body, and it appears as if there's random pale parts on the back and shoulder. You need more stripes on the face. Define the ear fur a little more, and I believe your stripes are a bit too thick. The tail also should not have a pale part on it, as the apprentice image came first. The pale underbelly should not go that far up on his chest/belly area, and the stripes need to be smudged. Sorry in advance for wall of text 01:33, 4/19/2017

Scratch the stripe thickness part 01:35, 4/19/2017

Winter, while I'll fix most of the above things, I will literally send you the files of both the KP and the App. I colorpicked from the base color layer. I also colorpicked from the stripes layer. Also, the random pale parts are highlights, but I'll fix those up no problem. Also, I was told earlier to show the pale belly, but I'll recede it I guess. 01:46, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

I can send the original file for the warrior and/or apprentice if you need them. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:51, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Another thing, Winter, I have the exact same amount of stripes here as the other images. They have the ones leading from the eyes, and the few head stripes, but there's no others. 01:57, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

reups I didn't remove the pale tail since Jayie said it was there. 03:52, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

reups again added some small cream parts that I missed. 02:55, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 19:45, 4/23/2017

Approved

Beechfur (TC) (W) - Approved
I'm really proud with this one! 18:46, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I'll try to fix the cut of nose later. 18:47, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

The blank isn't quite the right size - it's smaller all around by a bit.

The shading could be smoothed out. Shyaw, if you need any help with the Charart and their size, you have to go to the Charart page, click on the file of the blank, and at the top near the name, there is a button to press that should say 'see full size image' And then right click when its open, and save it! 18:51, 4/15/2017

The lineart is blurred. ErmineGlow (talk) 19:07, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Broken, you are truly magical. Thank you so much! The weird pixels that I was having trouble with on Icewing are gone if I do that! Now I know what you guys meant by saving the file wrong! 19:13, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you! And your welcome :D Smooth out the shading? If you need help with smoothing out the shading, click on the blur tool, go to the bottom of the tool options, and there should be a checkbox named 'hard edge' and click on the box. And then put the rate to 100. The rate box should be at the bottom and you could adjust to whatever you think if right for you! 19:20, 4/15/2017

There's waste a little ways out by the --> side on the tail, near the tip. 19:23, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, and could you smudge the earpink a bit? 19:27, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't find the waste, but I tried removing it anyways. :) 19:43, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Round out the shoulder-ish area shading to the curve of the body, as it makes a pretty distinct angle as of now. Also, smooth out the shading just a bit more, for a gradient.

Reuploaded 20:05, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if you need these but the colors I used were, for the base 1c1100, for shading 0d0700 and 080400 (this one for darker parts), and ear pink 844f4f mainly. – ' •   Water ' ' • ' 20:10, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Water! I checked them and the base and shading are good, but I'm not sure the ear pink looks right. 20:20, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the eye sparkle (the white eye pixel)? Unless it's just me, I can't see it. Also, smooth out the shading again, as I'm not seeing much of a difference from last time.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is good! 22:51, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a bit?

Reuploaded 16:16, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry I sound like a broken record but, smooth out the shading again? It should fade to the base more, and it still isn't much of a gradient.

Reuploaded :) 23:20, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the depth of the shading 01:31, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:30, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define where the pupil is? It looks like the normal blank blank in regards to the eye 20:30, 4/17/2017

Reuploaded 22:58, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Mind defining the light on the hind legs? 23:18, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on both legs farthest from us and smooth out the earpink? Very nice! 00:52, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed some more

Reuploaded Thanks! :) 01:17, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Did you smooth the shading? Not trying to be rude, but I don't see any difference

Reuploaded 02:01, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Just noticed there's some green from the eye leaking onto the fur, and it looks like there's some shading on <-- side of the tail that should be removed

Reuploaded 02:41, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more

Reuploaded 23:03, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more, particularly in the neck and chest area. 20:16, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:35, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smoothed out the shading more. 01:10, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the shading that's on the front of the leg by the base of the chest? 19:46, 4/23/2017

Reuploaded I couldn't understand where you were referring to, but hopefully this is better. :P 19:55, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Muchos better :) CBA? 19:58, 4/23/2017

Approved

Shinecloud (Star) - Approved
04:28, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me but I don't think the base looks sand-colored, it kinda just looks white imo

Sand can come in a range of colors, including almost white.

Define the shading depth just a tiiiiiny bit? Purdy <3333 05:56, 4/21/2017

I love that heart on her head. Smoothen out the tail shading? 06:32, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:40, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Correct me if I am wrong, but make the tail bushy? If we had to do it for Rosetail, wouldn't this be the same since she was stated to have a bushy tail? 15:05 Fri Apr 21

Define eye depth?

Sun, she was not named for her tail, so it stays as is. Smooth out the shading some more 15:31, 4/21/2017

Re-uploaded 18:32, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 15:51, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:17, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved

Fenneldust (DF) ~ Approved
here's some bad attempt at emulating the pattern of a king cheetah 22:19, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

<3 Amazing!! Is there any white hairs on the muzzle? I like this alot! 22:21, 4/21/2017

Is that shading on the forehead? If so, smooth it out. 22:58, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded they're there, but the muzzle isn't particulary big on this one 16:03, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved

Ferris (KP) - Approved
00:49, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Looking good! Mind cropping the image? 01:21, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think these images need cropping 12:26, 4/22/2017

Re-uploaded. Actually, there was a lot of unneeded space on <--- side of the image so I did crop it, and also messed around with some other things. 12:56, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little? It sort of blends in with the color 15:49, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried. 16:19, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved

Mocha (KP) ~ Approved
01:27, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful job on this one! Your StarClan cats are my favorite <3 Smooth out the shading on the bottom of the back leg on ---> side? If you have no clue what I mean, I'll try to describe it the best I can xd <span style="">18:40, 4/22/2017

Reupload Thanks Broken! I hope I got the place you meant. 19:51, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:50, 4/23/2017

Approved

Smoke (Q) ~ Approved
eh.

Define the shading depth on the face 15:18, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? <span style="">19:50, 4/23/2017

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