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Leopardfoot ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? Dew st  ar  Don't judge me!   23:07, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Crookedstar's Promise.   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 23:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could you also expand Code of the Clans? 18:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok guys. How do i do that?? Sorry! Dew st  ar  Don't judge me!   21:35, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

You either add more detail or more history. Also, could you possibly find a better main quote? Awesome. 21:45, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, you switch out the main quote for something else. Preferably a quote that shows her personality. 22:02, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Basically what Atelda said. ;)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 22:12, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well i don`t have Bluestar`s prophecy and Crookedstar`s promise and i don`t no if Leopardfoot is even in Code of the clans -_- Im trying my best but still i no that Leopardfoot has Pinestar`s kits but i don`t no what Leopardfoot is like nothing explains it???????? And i dont no what expand means like do i take parts from the book? -_-  Dew  st  ar  Don't judge me!   22:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, ok, let's slow down. First, it doesn't matter if you have neither of the books, that's what Harper Collins Browse Inside is for ;). Second, If she is mentioned in Code of the Clans, it would be mentioned in her article. Third, If you want to know what she is like, just read her article, most of the time, the stuff in an article, shows her personality, by her actions and words. Fourth, Expand means to make it bigger, so basically, it's detailing it ;) Fifth, you can take parts from the book, and add it too her article if it's nessicary. You try to avoid taking direct quotes, meaning typing word for word of what she says. I hope this helped. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 22:54, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

So do i go into her articale and detail it more??/ i dont get it cuz im getting frustrated  Dew  st  ar  Don't judge me!   14:24, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but first you need what she is saying in front of you. Than you take the information from it and detail it. Please don't get frusterated, it get's easier, but only if you let it. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 20:04, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest you check out the guidelines. 22:28, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Dew, is this still being worked on? It's been over a week. 15:59, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over this nomination if you want. 20:52, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Separate the first two paragraphs of Bluestar's Prophecy if possible. 05:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok done. I expanded CP and COTC. added a new main quote. And seperated the first two paragraphs. That took a while. Comments? 11:35, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 00:18, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Sweetflower. Unfortunately this article has already been voted on and granted silver status, but it was not updated on the talk page. 01:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok, I'll fix up a diferent article xD. 11:17, November 10, 2011 (UTC)