Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Graypool (Ki) ~ Redone
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a girl? ouo 19:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

To confirm, I did a tweak on it. I noticed you weren't sure. 19:56, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading a lot. 23:42, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Does this shading make more sense? 17:02, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing, reupload it again so we can at least see it in the file history? 19:26, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I uploaded it again but I'm not sure that it'll show the changes. 00:14, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the chest if there is any owo 15:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't intend to have shading there, but I could add it in if you want. 18:05, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading, and the shading near the chest-area (sorta on the neck) looks blotchy. Thin it out and make it less round? x3 00:38, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Cinder? o3o 12:53, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-.- I'm such a fail. Sorry i was out for a while but I had meant to re-upload. Anyway changes aren't showing. 23:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

This shading still doesn't look right. I suggest just using the one in the tutortial. Also blur the shading. And make her nose gray. 14:58, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Er...I think it's been 2 weeks. :S Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  05:57, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take it. 21:05, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if the colors match.. If not, I'll just redo it again xD  21:32, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light source and darken the shading a tiny, tiny bit owo 21:37, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Too dark. Lighten her up. Skt ANZAC day  22:37, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (ki) - Withdrawn
eeeeee, so proud. *squees* Okay, I'm done. OA was Shimmersong, Tweak by Bramble, redone by Mistypebble. Redone due to Lack of realistic stripes. So, besides darkening the stripes (I'm looking at it compared to the rest, and kicking myself), what else needs to be done? Maple On dA and Skye 21:11, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading. 21:21, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

The chest highlight looks a little bright 02:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes and blur/smudge them and the stripes seem to fade into the chest on the other images, try to match that. Also define the earpink. 03:24, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the outer edges of the chest more opaque :3 07:43, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Maplefern? 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yep! It was a very busy week this week, sorry. D: Maple On dA and Skye 11:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but even though it's been busy for you, it's been more than a week since upload, and there are no exceptions. This is declined, anybody with a free project may take over. 14:14, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
I'll take away the pale chest if needed. Redone for triangly stripes. I guess we aren't listing OA's anymore soo. Comments? 21:54, 04 17, 2012

I thought Sky still had claim to this. 22:18 Tue Apr 17

-sigh- If she does, I don't know. It wasn't reserved for her. I thought she was taking a break anyways? I could withdraw it. 22:22, 04 17, 2012

Ha, I was planning to do it when I came back, but I'm not all that bothered. Have it if you want it. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Also, add a stripe running down the back, just like the tail has one, and (if you want), can you move the first part of the stripe under the chin up, an connect it to the eye? 23:37, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

When was she described as this? (just asking) And if you want her to have a paler chest, extend it at a top more. 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait, never mind. xD  15:26, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:31, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make this a lot brighter- she was described as pale gray. XD 02:49, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added stripe, defined shading, lightened it...and I'll fix the chest and earpink now. 10:09, 04 18, 2012

Make the stripe going down her back look less like shading. 18:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs to be much paler  18:17, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:48, 04 18, 2012

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 22:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes curve with the body more. 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the right front leg not have any stripes on it...? 10:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes a bit? 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly and lower the opacity on it a bit. 11:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redone...not much to say. :3 Comments? 15:20, 04 22, 2012

This is just an opinion, but even thought we've approved images with this kind of tabby style, it looks more like mottled fur effects to me. Though, it might help if the stripes all didn't point in the direction of her tail  15:34, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 19:15, 04 22, 2012

blur the shading on her back and neck -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:51, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her since was described as a pale gray tabby? 19:55 Sun Apr 22

Re-uploaded. 21:15, 04 22, 2012

Define the shading a bit and blur it. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  01:30, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the gray more, and there's waste in the triangle between her hindleg and front leg, on the herbs, and on her chest. Also, can you make the stripes curve with her body a bit more, and make the zigzag down the middle less triangular? 05:09, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lakeshine (Q) ~ Redone
Comments? 02:04 Fri Apr 20

Purdy kitteh! Lighten/brighten the ear-pink and fill in the white pixel on her left forepaw *hope my eyes aren't spazzing*. 02:46, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

It looks tinted brown just a bit, can you fix that? (sorry if it's just my computer)  14:32, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a little brighter? 20:18, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye sir <33 The shading is supposed to be sorta dark magenta tinted. I'd kinda like to keep it that way :3 23:47 Fri Apr 20

This should match the warrior image. It was nominated to match each other, making a whole different style is pointless, just one image was needed to be redone to match the other. Whoever made the warrior image could be disappointed, since their image has to be redone, even though I think the image is perfectly fine. 00:31, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it should be redone, as both patterns looked unnatural, imho.

I know that it may look unrealistic, but...I really did like that image, and some people are just incapable of doing perfect styles in the first place. I think instead of doing overhauls, it's time to honor the OAs more by at least keeping the style. Because, art isn't something that's wrong, or bad, but something that proves the uniqueness of a person. You know what I mean? And maybe that complete overhauls aren't the right thing anymore. Maybe it upsets OAs...I mean no disrespect to anyone, really. Sorry for my rambling there...And this doesn't count just for this image, but others too. 14:37, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

No, no, no. You're completely right. (Well said, btw, and this is one of the many reasons we love you. XD) That right there won me over, and I'm for keeping the pattern on the warrior image. 8D

I'm confused, I change the pattern to the warrior? 14:55 Sat Apr 21

Yes. 23:22, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Guys, listen. I don't want anything started, but on the votes, there was a consensus to have both changed, and it's too late to take back the vote. I'm expecting to get the firing squad on this, but the warrior image doesn't look mottled to me, and at least the old queen did. Also, the warrior's shading makes the patches just look like it has extra dark areas instead of shading. Please don't kill me for this, it's just my two cents :S  00:37, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe heres what she could do, keep her pattern(Like for the mottles and stuff) but follow the patch style me(I worked on Lakeshine first, Atelda took over) and Atelda did. So that way, it looks like both images. Thats my suggestion. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:50, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

I went with Maple's suggestion. I made the placement of gray the same as the warrior. 22:59 Sun Apr 22

The grey looks greenish in color. It might just be some weird effect. Try tinting it slightly blue. Breeze whisker  03:32, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:24 Tue Apr 24

Blur the shading on the front legs a bit. Skt Happy ANZAC day! 22:02, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. A) ~ Redone
Well, I thought...while he has this alt. The pale belly's a preference, I can remove it if you want. :3 Comments? 22:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:12, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

His ear should be torn. 21:57, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  23:00, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate it so it's more orange and less golden. 23:22, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:05, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste in the nick ear, and it might just be me, but the shading seems ti be the same color as the stripes. I suggest using a darker shade of that color (if it is colored) or putting the stripes under the shading layer. 05:14, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) ~ Redone
Well, that was fun. :3 I picked his colors off of pictures of both dark ginger and pale ginger cats, so I'm pretty sure this is accurate colour-wise. And I gave him his daughter's eye. 8D Comments? 16:55, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink easier to see through the shading, please :3. 18:34, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat leg and tail shading a bit. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:27, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Round the shoulder shading a little bit. Breeze whisker  03:23, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:10, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Socks (KP) ~ Redone
Needed to match the loner. OA was MosspathofSkyClan. Comments? 12:19, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the eyes the same blue colour as the loner and define the earpink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  13:18, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 14:43, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

The white muzzle still doesn't match the loner, make the white go up to his eyes, not his nose. 19:22, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the white. It looks sorta grey. Breeze whisker  19:58, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:03, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

The white should be just under his eyes, not covering his whole eyes. 17:01, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white on his face. 20:17, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a wee bit :3, and I don't think it looks smudged on his other images. <span style="">20:18, 23, 04, 2012 20:18, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his haucnh -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:55, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

He looks derp-eyed (to me, anyway). Just take the white pixel on his left side and move it over past the black... it should look fine then. xD <span style="">08:11, 04 24, 2012

It still doesn't match the loner. The white is around the muzzle and eyes, not down onto the neck.

Reuploaded  23:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Patchpelt (E) ~ Redone
Hey guys! 8D I did a redo of Patchpelt, based off of Breeze's warrior version. ^^ OA was Icethroat, with a tweak by Bramble, another tweak by Sandstar12, a redo (I think) by Skye-pie and a tweak by Breezewhisker. Hope you like it. Questions, comments, concerns...?

23:10, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Nice. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  01:28, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the patches more consistent to the warrior image. His right paw is black, not his left paw. 02:02, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not sure what to do... Leaf, you said to 'make them more consistent'. I was looking right at the picture while I did it and made sure to the best of my ability they were right. So, I think it looks fine. I changed the paws though. 02:11, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Whiten the white and make the smudges more hard edged like the warrior. I think that will work. 02:13 Mon Apr 23

Reuploaded. 00:07, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. 00:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his neck. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:57, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Moss (Lo) (KP) ~ Redone
I couldn't tweak that. Heck, I couldn't even get the lineart on another layer without taking half the image with it. OA was Ashshadow.

Blur the highlights and define the earpink. 01:16, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The highlights are fine, imho.

This was redone by me Skye, you know that right? I redid it about a month ago, it was just under the wrong file name. 10:49, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Then explain to me why in the world the old file is still on the character page? No, I didn't know. Seems someone didn't upload under the correct file like they were supposed to.

I tried to make the file name the same one as the one on her character page, but it wouldn't let me. So then someone said they would fix it, and never did. 20:03, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

All you had to do was re-upload, Silver. It's not that hard, honestly. Added to the fact the image sat around for at least a month without anyone doing anything with it and you didn't even have the image on your user page.... I'll be asking Scarlet what to do about this, since technically, you (or whoever took care of that image issue) didn't follow the proper instructions...

Frecklewish (KP) - Redone
Mmmm finally got around to doing this. Everything was taken from the apprentice charart, so no telling me to change colors (including earpink, which is there) or pattern please. OA was Flamingomom3. Needed to match her other images. Comments? 02:29, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Lovely~ 20:30, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mottles or add more of them. ^^  21:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ohai 04:35, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Patchpelt (A) - Redone
Here's his apprentice. Redone to match his warrior. Leggy made me give him a purple nose. I'll fix it in the next upload. Thanks to everybody who watched. <3 Comments? Breeze whisker  02:58, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

But I like the purple nose...;.; Blur the shading on the face and front leg/shoulder a tad. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  03:35, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Brindleface (Q) ~ Redone
Uh yeah, redone to match the warrior. OA was *.* This was hard I tried DX  I totally read Poolcloud as Poocloud in the file history *deskhead*   Comments? 03:49 Tue Apr 24

Blur the shading a bit. haha, Poocloud <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey   05:59, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. 10:42, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be dark brown. File changes may not be showing yet. Comments? 05:29, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink less red? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  11:10, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (A) - Redone
Nobody else wanted this... original artist was Shaf Girl. The stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 17:30, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. They look really hard-edged. 19:36, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink and blur it a little. 20:28, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur it :3 21:34, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:49, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ki) - Redone
Redone because the shading and the paw was wrong (that's not why it was redone..x3) -gives thanks to my friend who watched and critiqued- ouo Comments? 21:24, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

-Feels special- lolz x3 I sorta missed the bell adding part, so can you add a highlight/shine to it and move it two or three pixels up a bit? ^~^

Make the white less grey, and define the earpink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt ANZAC day  22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black a bit less pure black and define the earpink ( Maybe... |D ) 00:10, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3  03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.) 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) - Redone
I think I made it too dark.... not sure. Anyways, needed to match leader and last OA was Silvereye. There's lots of older ones, so if you wanna know those, look yourself. XD Comments? 03:42, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Made it match better. XD 03:54, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading slightly. Much better than mine <3. 11:07, April 25, 2012 (UTC)