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Whitewing (W) - For Approval
Welp here we go <3 (Tysm Thunder who kindly gave me my beautiful Whitewing) Moo (talk) 01:27, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add/define the shading depth. -- 01:33, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

some random specks of white are around the image, here

01:44, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 01:59, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Smoothen out the transition between shading depths and define the light on the paws 02:08, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define by adding more shading depth? --Moo (talk) 19:12, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Yes. -- 19:28, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! Will do ty --Moo (talk) 19:49, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looking very nice! add some light to the front legs and a little bit on the back foot closest to us. 15:24, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 20:41, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add light to the back paw, and I recommend adding more light to the front legs and paws to make them look less flat. 02:18, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not really familiar with the shading and sources, Could someone do me a redline please? Moo (talk) 20:32, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

with the source you have, i would erase some of the shading in these spots that i marked. Could you define the shading depth on the tail as well? 21:01, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are you sure about those light patches? Anyway I did them <3 Moo (talk) 20:48, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

There should only be shading depth on one side of the legs, so remove some on << this side. -- 16:49, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

As soon as I get home tomorrow I Will! --Moo (talk) 08:33, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 21:10, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oh my goodness yes sorry Moo (talk) 03:59, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

I'm a bit confused about what Greenflower said, Ok scratch that - REALLY confused. Can I have some help or explanation? Thank you guys <3 Moo (talk) 06:49, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure myself, Millie, but, here's a redline for where you could put/expand some shading depth to help finish this off (what you've got on the tail is fine, that's why I left it :D)

I'm still confused, What am I doing with the Redline? I already have shading depth, Sorry I'm so tired Moo (talk) 01:15, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

Redline is to just to show where I personally think you could expand the shading you have alread (if that clarifies it?)

Im still confused sorry Moo (talk) 08:11, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

What Max means is where they've redlined on the image is where shading should be expanded or added. You may already have depth, but where Max has shown shows it could stand to be expanded somewhat.

20:14, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

also, could eye bring out the color of the eyes, they seem to be dulled behind the shading 01:29, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Expanded? and Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:56, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing much of a difference other than your depth layer being darker. Would you mind removing some of the shading depth on the legs to show the difference? -- 03:15, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Expanded means making more of it, put simply. I also feel the shading could be smoothed on the legs as it looks rather patchy. 03:18, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Whitewing (K) ~ For Evaluation
21:10, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit. -- 23:51, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

recede the shading everywhere. 02:11, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:39, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth layer more. -- 13:49, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? Moo (talk) 20:52, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:05, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading maybe? Looking a little sharp --

06:09, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth more. It appears you are darkening your shading layer, but that doesn't define the depth as much. Create a new layer of shading, make it thinner than your shading layer, and make it much darker than your shading layer. Smooth it out but leave it a tad sharper than your shading layer, that will help the image with flatness. -- 16:48, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Make the shading smoother? --Moo (talk) 08:34, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:34, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, made it a bit better 20:53, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth more + smooth the depth on the haunch. -- 00:29, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I obviously have issues defining the shading 06:16, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add a little bit more shading on both ears? 17:42, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:32, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shoulder shading a little more, it would kind of make a "u" shape in that area, and also smooth out the shading on the bum, above the tail too a little?

Reuploaded 20:54, December 15, 2019 (UTC)

Comments? It's been 5 days 01:02, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the face and add some to the jaw; define the depth on the tail and foreleg. -- 01:10, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could be smoothed out a little in the area where the body meets the tail as well. 01:59, December 21, 2019 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (K) - For Approval
ok 21:18, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

this looks darker than his other images in the set? could you also define the texture a bit too?

reup 02:05, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Can you shade the little chest area poking between the head and foreleg? 04:12, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup

nudge 00:04, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

You're only supposed to ask for comments when five days has gone, which it has not. Regardless, I think the texture can be lighter to match the og set? 03:43, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

reup 16:34, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

The texture also seems a little softer, per the apprentice too.

hot kittem 00:05, December 16, 2019 (UTC)

I know that we keep going in this cycle of the texture, but I still think that the texture could be defined just a bit more im sorry. 02:01, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W)-for evaluation
oof, I will fix this tomorrow, it’s almost midnight-- 05:37, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

I have fixed the file for you, you needed to link it. Remove the black background, this can be done using a wand tool or clicking the delete background button. -- 00:01, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more. 05:11, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Where is the light source? --Moo (talk) 08:34, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is disappearing near the lineart. What I did to fix this was fill the lineart with my shading colour and then blur, so the tool doesn’t blur the shading with the blank space. As for the background, I recommend lowering the opacity of that layer and adding a layer on top with the lineart (full opacity) so you can see where there should be black and where there shouldn’t be. I’m probably not the best for advice though; I’m also only a project kit. --

22:25, December 7, 2019 (UTC) Oof, I think I was seeing the old version (my page didn’t reload). Nvm --

22:42, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

add depth to the shading and there is a corner of waste where the tail bends. this looks very good! 00:56, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the eye color a bit. They're supposed to be sky blue. Smooth out the haunch shading a little while you're at it too. Good job so far, Oceanpelt! -- 01:11, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded (shading, eye color, and waste.-- 03:29, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light on the front legs? 08:58, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is very flat. Try adding a second layer of shading (but only cover like half of what you've originally shaded) to add depth. 23:41, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up (also it looks like the legs are a different color so I will mess around with it tomorrow)-- 03:14, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the shading on the back tail. 21:05, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Still a little dot of waste near the bend of the tail :P --

05:36, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

re-up-- 12:05, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out your shading layers a bit. -- 01:01, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Will re upload soon, GIMP has been acting up. (When I try to select the image to erase white on the inside the eraser doesn’t work)-- 18:55, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Still need to add light on the front legs? 10:35, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Oh noes, I messed it up- 19:20, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

There's a little bit of waste in in the bottom left corner. And your shading layers still need to be smoothed out a bit. 19:41, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Curve the chest shading a bit, and I would do a run-through for leaking shading. -- 20:16, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading depth and the light on the front legs. way down  hadestown    |undefined    04:31, 12/20/2019 ​

working on this with guidance from Patch-- 00:19, December 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re upI need help removing waste does anyone have any advice?-- 00:35, December 22, 2019 (UTC)

Before you remove the waste, size the image down. It's far too big. -- 01:10, December 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think I’m just gonna redo this, expect it to be a few days-- 20:05, December 22, 2019 (UTC)

Wasptail (W) ~ For Approval
I couldn't tell if there was texture on the apprentice or just the design of the stripes, so I left it as is.

16:02, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like there is a LITTLE texture on the apprentice, but I had to look very close to see it so I would say it’s fine-- 03:05, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Looking at the old warrior and apprentice, I think there's some faint highlights on it and the stripes look a tiny bit smudgier? The earpink looks a bit dark compared to her other images too, is that shading? could you erase some of it, if it is? The shading you have looks good, and this is only a suggestion that you don't have to do, but perhaps try a warmer shading tint? you could try red, I think that would look nice. Again, you don't have to if you'd rather keep the tint you have. 21:25, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

User asked for an extension until the weekend due to in real life obligations. 04:31, December 17, 2019 (UTC)

Willowpelt (K) ~ For Evaluation
This looks horrible I know 09:25, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the face a bit, and there's leaking shading along the face, foreleg, and haunch. 02:02, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Cherryfall (Alt W) - CBA
so the design on the family tree has colored patches akin to showing her as a tortie...but given that her main images have stripes, I did try and use that here.

CBA? I love this

Willownose (Ki) - CBA
00:55, December 21, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Thornclaw (Alt. W) - For Approval
-- 01:04, December 21, 2019 (UTC)

Can you recede some of the shading on the shoulder right underneath the head on << side? If the light is coming from that side of the image, there wouldn't be that much darkness there. The bit on the neck is fine - and apologies if this is poorly worded, work has absolutely destroyed me. I can offer a redline if its easier.

Dewspring (K) - For Approval
-- 01:28, December 21, 2019 (UTC)

The image seems a bit darker than the apprentice. Specifically, it seems as if the base color you've used is a touch too dark, but it may just be the texture or the shading, not sure. The apprentice's base color is #828282, just for your reference. 01:55, December 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded You were definitely right. The base on the warrior is also off so I'm gonna tweak that to match better. -- 02:30, December 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you recede the shading on the tail tip just ever so slightly? Also smooth out the shading towards the top of the back leg, it might just be due to having a texture, but it looks quite blocky.

Mossfire (W) - For Approval
15:25, December 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the front leg closest to us, just a smidge?

Tawnypelt (K Alt 2) ~ For Approval
21:09, December 22, 2019 (UTC)

Talon (K) ~ For Approval
This set is all over the place, so I did my best to follow the kit and rogue. 21:09, December 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shorty (W) ~ For Approval
question mark 21:09, December 22, 2019 (UTC)

the base on the rogue appears just a couple shades darker than what you might have here? or my eyes are just messing with me

Reups There are like two bases lol, but I darkened the one of them a bit. 19:01, December 23, 2019 (UTC)

Roach (Ki) - For Approval
23:59, December 22, 2019 (UTC)

Swallowtail (RC) (W) - For Approval
help -- 03:08, December 23, 2019 (UTC)

This doesn't appear to match the old warrior's design? (unless you were given permission to redo the pattern)

Sorry, I didn't realise that the elder had a new pattern to match. The pale muzzle on the elder seems to be a warmer cream than what you've currently got, and there could stand to be more stripes to match the elder's side - as it shows the same side.