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Spottedleaf ~ Silver Nomination
Her article looks good comments? 17:17, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Perhaps expand Spottedleaf's Honest Answer, Forest of Secrets, and in the first series, you might want to add a what she is doing in the dreams. Mainly just A Dangerous Path, and Rising Storm. At el  da  19:25, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

SkyClan's Destiny could also be expanded a bit, as well as Dawn. Also expand ^what Atelda said^, and it will be ready! xD 22:40, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

ok I expanded Spottedleaf's Honest answer, Rising Storm, Dawn and a dangerous path. I don't own all the books so I'll try to do what I can for Skyclan's destiny and Forest of Secrets but I might take a bit longer, and I couldn't word Spottedleaf's Honest answer quite right, if some could please help with that 19:24, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

does it look ok?

Comments???

Please, be patient. Many of us are extremely busy since its the end of the year and we all have a lot of schoolwork. Can SotC be expanded any more? And do you think you could go into more detail for The Fourth Apprentice? 22:12, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

sorry those were a day apart the dates just don't show 02:23, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur for family needs a reference, otherwise, I don't see anything else wrong. Good job. ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 19:24, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

The Power of Three and Omen of the Stars sections need to be expanded, they look short and choppy. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  00:00, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

they are short because she only appears briefly in dreams I'll see what I can do though 19:05, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

The Darkest Hour and New Prophecy Series looks really choppy. It's all smushed into one big paragraph. 20:49, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed some of the wording on Bluestar's Phophecy and also fixed the tense since it switched around. I'll look to see if there's anymore of that. 14:24, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

The ref#14 isn't cited correctly. You can see that if you go down to the references. I'll go see if I can fix it. 18:06, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I fixed it, no worries! 18:09, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

ok I expanded Skyclans Destiny, The Fourth Apprentice, Long shadows, Eclipse, Twilight and, The Sight added a family refrence for Ashfur and split up sections into paragraphs. comments? 06:58, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

SkyClan's destiny should be in separate paragraphs, and there are a few grammar/spelling issues. 17:01, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I split skyclan's D into two paragraphs and fixed all the spelling/grammer issues I could find comments? 18:07, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's still tons of spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes, but I'll fix those. 18:10, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, there's lots. I'll fix some too. 18:27, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed some, but there's still a lot more. 18:32, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

ok I fixed a lot more spelling issues 22:26, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but there's still more. This will take a while to fix... 22:30, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll try to fix some more, but this will take some time to fix. 22:45, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

ok I used spell check the only things spelled wrong according to the online dictionary are the cat names and such, as for the grammer sorry guys I'm trying I really am english is not my strong suit it's more like math 05:04, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand Sunrise, Secrets of the Clans and Code of the Clans? 06:26, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

sunrise ok but I don't have sercrets of the clans or code of the clans 16:18, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I will try to find code of the clans and expand it. Silvermoon☾

Really? Yeah, math's my strong suit too. I'll go on fixing some grammar mistakes. 17:51, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I fixed all the grammar mistakes! Took a while to read through the whole thing! :P Anyway, if someone could proofread it anymore, that would be great! 18:18, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

thanks a lot squirrelflame! umm is it ready? can we CBV this soonish? sorry I'm not trying to rush but I am going on a two week camp (no computer) starting on the 20th but Atelda agreed to take over if it isn't ready in time. so sorry my first nomination too! so comments? 22:28, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I guess it looks ok! Any other comments? 22:46, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Into the Wild should be expanded and its style should be fixed. 16:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is a stupid question, but what is style? 16:22, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reworded SHA a little bit, and made a few other minor changes. 09:09, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Style is basically the way its written. The paragraphs of Into the Wild are short and stiff, and they should be flowed together better, in addition to being expanded. 16:49, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Moonflight. The Into the Wild section should be expanded and make a little more sense. Spottedstar42 The WWi ki van dals Mu st fall!!!  16:58, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok expanded, reworded, and reworked the Into the Wild section. I reworded some of the SHA section too. 18:34, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better now! 21:07, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mousewhisker ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 11:07, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Brilliant! Could Outcast, Sunrise, Fading Echoes and Sign of the Moon be expanded a bit? 20:00, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

And Long Shadows xD Maybe add one more quote? 04:10, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! Could you possibly find/swith another quote for the main one. It doesn't quite describe his personality. At el  da  23:09, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'll try to find another quote. 23:40, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the history, but I don't know what quote to use for Mousewhisker's main quote. 09:37, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... Is there any quotes that come from the narrator? ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 21:47, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think so, but I'm not sure. I'll go check. 10:12, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I checked all the books, but I couldn't find anything that describes him. 07:45, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can Outcast be expanded anymore? 18:51, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you find a better quote? What's up there right now, doesn't seem very good. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  19:52, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could Omen of the Stars be expanded? They look pretty short. 20:50, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try to expand and fix the quote. Please be patient. 01:55, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think maybe Outcast and Night Whispers history could be expanded a bit. 22:20, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any longer quotes? These are pretty short. But if not, it's still fine! :D 18:11, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do. 10:40, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I could only expand the Omen of the Stars Series section a little because he isn't meantioned much in those books. As for the quotes, I'm still looking for them. If anybody could help me with the quotes, that would be great. 10:55, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try... I don't know if I can though. 18:35, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I can't find anything. It's hard because I haven't read all the books yet! XD I guess it's fine if you can't find a better one either! 22:52, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? 00:15, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! 22:47, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Do I have to add or expand anything else? 00:21, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. CBV? 16:11, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 16:14, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reedfeather ~ Silver Nomination
His article looks great! Comments? 11:08, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Possibly add more detail to battle of the clans! ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 14:49, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

yea and maybe 1-2 more quotes, looks good 16:55, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, expand the family section; Add Stormfur's kits, and any others you missed, along with their citations. :) And the things above. xD 20:51, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Will do! But, uh, could someone help me with the family section? I'm not really good at that. 07:21, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

I tried to expand Battle of the Clans, but there was nothing I could add in there. Dreamwhisper had this nominated before, and expanded it. As for the quotes and family section, I'll add it later. 01:56, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a better main quote that could be there? 20:53, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I switched the main quote, but I still need help with the family section. As you can see, I'm not good with family stuff. =P 11:26, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I fixed it for you. :D I think its ready now. 17:27, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 22:52, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! Thanks! Anything else? 10:23, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

After more votes are over, we'll CBV this. 17:40, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with this!  ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:33, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 16:12, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up. 16:54, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Molewhisker - Silver Nomination
He looks good to me. Comments? 21:07, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add a transition between the first two paragraphs, and you might want to go through the article to look for clarity and grammar issues. Other than that, it looks great! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:40, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. :3 14:52, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Any more quotes? His article is awesome! 17:03, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Added one. 20:50, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! I see nothing wrong with it. 21:52, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 18:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed once some votes are closed. 21:24, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 16:12, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:02, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Jay's Wing ~ Silver Nomination
I am a bit confused on the quotes because it's Jayfeather who is experiencing the things, but I do have some in mind. Dove's Wing has quotes but Dovewing isn't conscienc of her past life like Jayfeather is. So would someone clarify that for me? Otherwise I think his article looks good. ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 01:37, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should just give him the quotes he says while he's Jay's Wing. After all, the other ancient cats think he is Jay's Wing. 14:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I added three more quotes and a main one. Comments? ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 16:38, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! Can you find more quotes that show his personality better? Some of them don't really show anything about him. 17:24, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm...I'll try, but I'm not sure whether to include some from the narrator because the narrator is using Jayfeather's name rather than Jay's Wing. ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 21:16, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I guess you can use quotes from the narrator, as long as you include that its about Jay's Wing in the description. 21:55, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

So right now I am at my grandma's house for the rest of the week and I don't have the books with me. However, I'm about to check SoTM and LS from the library but I just wanted to give the heads up for the delay! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 17:06, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added a quote showing some of his personality. Comments? ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 18:32, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand the 4th paragraph of SotM, and is he seen any more near the end of SotM? Didn't he tell Half Moon about becoming the Stoneteller or something? Or was that Jayfeather... :P 17:18, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded it a little. It was Jay's Wing, I sweeped right over it. Oops. but it's added! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 01:10, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a few grammar things here and there. Looks good! 18:23, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, comments? 16:23, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 17:13, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 19:06, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) ~ Silver Nomination
I think it's ready! A lot of the references were wrong because of vandals, but I fixed them all. 20:32, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job. Some parts of the article are really confusing, so just real quickly clarify a few things. ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 21:14, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Clarified. Anything else? 21:37, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

If possible, find another quote. Awesome job! 21:48, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I added another quote. 21:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Move the trivia section above the character pixels and expand Starlight. 08:23, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done. It's hard to expand Starlight since she was only seen once in Starclan. 19:43, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, add details if you can. If not, supporting. =) 20:01, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try! :P 20:22, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded Moonrise by one sentence. Not a lot, I know, but it's hard! 20:51, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I think its ready now. :D 20:54, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Is there anything else? 23:29, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I just split a section into different paragraphs but otherwise I see nothing wrong with it.  ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 18:17, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Any other comments? 15:52, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! There are too many votes up, currently, though. 17:33, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll wait. XD 19:17, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 17:13, June 20, 2011 (UTC)V

Vote is up! 19:08, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Why did you say vote is up is the vote isn't there? 02:18, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Larchkit ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote, but there wasn't any other quote. 21:44, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a quote by the narrator that describes her? 21:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try... I don't know if I can find one, though. 01:42, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

I added one about Dustpelt's reaction to her death. I guess it's ok since it shows how others liked the character. 01:51, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Moonrise, it seems a bit short. 08:21, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

She died in Moonrise, so there isn't anything to add. I added a few more sentences, though. 19:44, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I know she died quite early, but I think you could find some way to expand it, especially Twilight's section. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  19:55, June 12, 2011 (UTC)I

I only added one sentence. I did a search in the book for Larchkit and there was only one result where she was mentioned. The other books are quite similar, with only one or two references. 20:57, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! I think its ready. 19:59, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think it could use a different main quote. . . the current one is bothering me. It's just Ferncloud telling her kits to stop doing who-knows-what, it doesn't really say anything about the character or anything else, for that matter. 22:30, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I tried to find a better quote, but there isn't anything else with Larchkit in it. I think the quote is fine because it shows that Larchkit is adventurous and does things that gets her in trouble a lot. 23:28, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think its fine. :D 17:14, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Any other comments? 15:53, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job. I see nothing wrong with it. 18:39, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dustpelt ~ Silver Nomination
I think it's ready! Anything else needed? 21:34, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand Sign of the Moon? 22:06, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

expand twilight, long shadows, the fourth apprentice and night whispers 07:03, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can Code of the Clans be expanded? 17:07, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try. It's going to take a while, though. I'll say when it's done. 18:26, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded them all as well as I could. I can't expand Code of the Clans, though because I don't have the book and I can't get it off HarperCollins either. Can someone please help? 19:47, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded Code of the clans as much as I could. Hope I helped XD 21:37, June 15, 2011 (UTC)T

Thanks! It really helped! =) Anything else? 22:54, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the last paragraph of The darkest Hour. You could mention the parts he fights in the battle. Looks great! 17:08, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't mention him a lot in the battle, just that he fought alongside Sandstorm. I added it in. Anything else? 19:15, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

The last paragraph in The Fourth Apprentice could be expanded a little, but otherwise it looks good! <span style="color:Lime;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:green;">❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:22, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Any other comemnts? 02:05, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any places where he is mentioned in the fight in Fire and Ice? 01:01, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

There's a fight in Fire and Ice? And even if there is, he isn't mentioned so I can't do anything there. 16:28, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanstar - Silver Nomination
He looks good to me. :3 21:54, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Was he seen in any other books? Other than that maybe expand it a bit more? It looks great! 22:12, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

add one more quote and expand code of the clans if possible 07:00, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

He wasn't in any other books, but I think Code of the Clans could be expanded a bit more; just add some more details. xD 17:12, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, expand it a bit more, but other than that I see nothing wrong! 22:57, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just to let you all know, I'm still working on this. I've just been kind of busy lately. :3 But I'll get to this tomorrow. The power is off at the moment, but somehow the internet still works. 01:25, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Songbird ~ Silver Nomination
I added all the quotes I could find, and expanded her history. Comments? 22:02, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change the main quote with one of the quotes below? The main quote right now doesn't seem to describe her, but if that's the only one that fits as her main quote, then never mind. Good job! =D

Can you get rid of the last quote or add a better background for it? It doesn't seem to say anything. 15:52, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...those were all the quotes I could find, including the narrator ones. Changed the main quote, deleted last quote. Anything else? 16:18, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add some more details to expand? It's ok if you can't, she's a very minor character. 19:06, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Added. Comments? 19:30, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! <font color="#33ccff">Snowdazzle <font color="Cyan" style="background:white;"> ROAD TRIPPP!! 22:50, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think there's anything else to fix. Good job Mistystar! 02:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Great job. I see nothing wrong with this! 01:08, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
There are quotes and I'm expanding it right now. Comments? <span style="color:Lime;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:green;">❀ Atelda ❀ talk 19:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any quotes that Blossomkit actually says? All the quotes currently are Rock's perspective on Blossomkit. The article had a few grammar things that I fixed, but other than that, it looks good! 21:25, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cats of the Clans is all from a narrative point of view which is Rock, plus there is absolutly no dialogue in the book at all. Thanks for the grammar check! <span style="color:Lime;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:green;">❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:30, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry about that! Silly me. :P Looks great! 23:07, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

xD No problem, thanks! Comments? 17:49, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add one more quote that shows her personality? Other than that, it looks great! 15:54, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, done! Any other comments? 18:42, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's ready! I see nothing wrong with it. :) 21:09, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

There was a typo at the bottom ;) Fixed. Well done angel. lol :P 08:24, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cloversplash ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote, which was the only thing she ever said or was said about her, and expanded CotC as much as possible. Comments? 17:26, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any quotes that others said about her? Or a quote from the narrator? It looks kind of empty with =out any quotes at the bottom. 21:10, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Are extremely minor articles supposed to be nominated? We had a discussion here about a character with just one line in the series and it was declined. 08:14, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

They should get nominations. If they appear only in the alligiances, then a nomination isn't necessary. 17:50, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Well, there aren't any more quotes I can add. Comments, then? 18:41, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Snow Falling on Stones ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded SotM, and added all the quotes that are related to her in any way. Comments? 18:25, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a few grammar things. Are you sure you can't expand it a little bit more? Maybe add some more detail? 21:12, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Added Snow to the main quote. It said "Night in SotM". If there's nothing else, then it looks quite good to me. 08:12, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, thanks for fixing the main quote! I can't expand any more, though. 18:50, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I see nothing wrong. 21:18, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Not sure if this is the right spot, but..
May I join PC? I've edited some articles and I find it pretty fun. So, anyway... may I? XD 07:05, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! A lead will soon add you in. 15:16, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! I'll add you in. See the FAQ for any questions. Welcome to the Project! 18:53, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Driftkit ~ Silver Nomination
His page looks awesome! Comments? 11:20, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find one more quote? I like it when there's at least three quotes at the bottom. I fixed a few grammar things and the article looks great! 16:07, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, find one more quote, and it should be ready! 18:56, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfur - Silver Nomination
This should have never been declined. Well, before then, we didn't decide that only allegiance-only characters do not need a nomination, so, here it is. 18:12, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you find another quote? If not, supporting! 18:54, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Found three. 20:49, June 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Derp. It was Crowclaw that was declined. Too many Crow- names... 21:11, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good. 21:13, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lion's Roar - Silver Nomination
All that really needed to be done was add a few quotes. The history is unexpandable because Lion's Roar only appears on two pages of Sign of the Moon. 20:35, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good to me. 21:11, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Same. 21:19, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Crowclaw - Silver Nomination
He's been declined earlier, but I just asked Moon, and as she says that every character with something more than in their history can be nominated, I'm nominating Crowclaw. Comments? 21:10, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any other mentions later in the discussion? Otherwise, it looks great! 21:21, June 21, 2011 (UTC)