Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Cinderpelt (MCA) - Declined
Defined and added shading depth; oa was Jenrock. Comments? 06:11 Tue Aug 13

The shading looks kinda blotchy; smooth it out? 13:20, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:23 Tue Aug 13

It still looks a bit blotchy. 23:36, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

It also looks kind of paintbrushy/blunt. 23:33 Wed Aug 14

Re-uploaded, please don't call my shading paintbrushy and/or blunt; this is how I shade my chararts. 03:26 Sun Aug 18

Maybe still blur/smooth it a little bit more, especially in the haunch/back area? 16:31, August 18, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

I honestly think it's fine, but I'll change it if others agree. 22:02 Tue Aug 20

I think that it could be blurred a little bit more and it still looks blotchy. 22:20, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but it's been a week. If any lead disagrees with my decision, they are more than welcome to change the heading back.

Sol (W) ~ Declined
Most recent OA was Breezy, tweaked for tufted tail. Changes may not be showing. Comments? 19:37, 08/16/2013

The tail looks a little spikey, try to make the fur flow together (I can't really word it right and I apologize)  20:56, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

Still working?

Declining due to the limit on tweaks. Anyone may take over if they wish.

Moss (KP) ~ Tweaked
OAs were Silvereye, Cloudy, and Ashshadow. Shading was flat and had an unclear lightsource. Btw, I redid the shading but kept the base pelt and collar the same. (Also - changes aren't showing) Comments for improvement?

Maybe blur the shading a little on the tail? 02:25, August 19, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Lighten the shading a tad, please, unless it's just my laptop, I can't see the lineart. x3 22:19, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, imho.

Reuploaded. Honestly, shading irked me so I just redid the shading again. Changes are not showing.

Is it just me or is one of the eyes not fully filled in 07:24, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

Nah, Skt, I think it's just how pale the lighter green is. I could be wrong, but that's what it looks like. 15:36, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Henry (KP) ~ Redone
redone because lots of things and i tried to keep the pattern mostly the same as well as the eye style 06:39, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sol (Ki) ~Tweaked
Tweaked for tufted tail tip. Latest OA was Paleh. Changes not showing. 21:17, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Could you try to curve the part where the tuft and the tail meet! It looks a bit crooked 17:50, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing. 22:23, August 25, 2013 (UTC)