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Swoop (CG) ~ For Approval
I haven't done a charart in like - 5 years please be gentle. 00:41, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

What are you talking about? This is amazing!! Regardless, I think the ginger is too neon compared to the queen. 01:29, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded aah thank you! I tried my best to dull the colour. 03:05, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the body. Nice work Echo!Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you!! Hopefully this looks a bit better. 21:14, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There's pinkish tint near her right cheek.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:55, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

The top of the shoulder shading and the outside of the haunch seem to be a little over-defined, sorry I know that's annoying. xD  H A W K  F I R E  23:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad on the front leg closest to us 00:44, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Potato, can you redline where the pink is? I can't catch onto it well since I shaded with red. 01:57, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Um.. I use a tablet, not a computer, can someone else show Echo what I mean?Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:05, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's just shading tint, nothing that looks different Malina457 (talk) 14:36, November 4, 2018 (UTC)malina

Yeah, I agree. There's no pink tint on the cheek from what I can see.  H A W K  F I R E  15:26, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to be broken record, but the orange still doesn't quite match. The queen is more saturated than what you have here. Maybe this will help? And there need to be some stripes over her chest. 15:44, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I just saw Shinx (the OA of the queen/kit-mother image) on Discord a few days ago. I could try and ask her if she has the file for the queen if you'd like. Maybe that would help in this situation?

Pebble (CG) ~ Withdrawn
idk this was a pretty lazy job 00:41, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded slight adjustments 02:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:40, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

What do you mean David? She must be related to Ashfoot. Anyways, can you make the mud look more brown-ish? Looking too light at the momentHeyoitpotater (talk) 15:40, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say the mud can be any color as long as it is visible, which it is. 17:39, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Um... her nose is two different colors. On the kit image it's full dark gray.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:58, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that's mud or shading, Potato Flakin.

Could you possibly define the ear shading? If it's meant to be not overly defined, that's good with me- I'm not sure how these sources work yet.

withdrawing, want something else. 17:52, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Moss (CG) ~ CBA
Moss is the most productive, the most paramount, the most essential character in all of the Tribe. 02:28, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

This is gorgeous!! Define the mud a bit more, or make it darker? It blends in a bit too well. 03:38, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Thank you! 04:32, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a bit more in the left ear?  H A W K  F I R E  13:27, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 15:06, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading, cannot see it.Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:44, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reups ...ok 17:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define earpink.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:00, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 00:40, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? Gorgeous! 15:43, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Jag (CG) ~ For Approval
Gosh, the mud was a challenge! I'm still not sure if i even did that well on it, but I tried. Ah well, I like challenges! I'm just gonna get this up before I ruin it more by fiddling. ^^; SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a bit. 03:33, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Can you fix the pupils a bit? They might just look weird on my screen but they look a bit off with them being pointed to the ground. This is super cute btw and you did great on the mud! 03:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eyes. And tysm, Echo. ^^ SquidwardPlays 03:54, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Is there a red or pink tint on the shading or something? It kind of sticks out, and I'm not sure if it goes well with the rest of Jag. Also, light source? Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There is the tint as Shadow said.. can you make the mud on the tail brighter? I can barely see it. Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:47, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Messed around with the mud on the tail a bit, is it any better? I also completely redid the shading. SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I can't see shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:01, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? SquidwardPlays 11:07, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Yes! This looks wonderful. The only thing I really see is the haunch shading looks kind of clumped in one spot, can you expand it to the belly and the bottom of the haunch more?  H A W K  F I R E  15:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I THINK I fixed the haunch shading. SquidwardPlays 11:19, November 4, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Bird That Rides the Wind (CG) ~ For Approval
ugh, that mud. I can't

This is probably because of the old pattern, but is there any way you can make those two back markings more "attached"? Malina457 (talk) 13:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Re-uploaded Like.. that?

Add more mud patches, she looks very bare.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:02, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded v.3: now with more mud

There should be a stripe or two that go across her chest. 15:52, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Night (CG) - For Evaluation
This is probably an unpopular opinion but I enjoyed doing the mud. Also, yes, I'll fix the shading. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:19, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and smudge the mud a little bit. It looks kind of clump in some areas, like the front leg and the flank.  H A W K  F I R E  13:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups nvm I don't like mud now Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:02, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. And the mud needs to be smudged a tad more. And is it me, or does her eyes make her look like an ailen from space? You don't have to change the eyes by the way.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:06, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups that's meant to be eyelids, because eyes and earpink are my weak spots. Also the shading is now officially as dark as it can get. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 01:05, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink is now super dark on the right side and bright on the left side. Can you make them the same color?  H A W K  F I R E  03:42, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I think that's because the shading is covering the ear pink, Hawkey ^^ Regardless, could you add some more shading to the haunch and tail? I can see where you defined the shading on the face, chest, legs and stomach, but I can't see any shading on the haunch or tail. 15:37, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

My bad! Disregard my previous comment. ^^  H A W K  F I R E  19:00, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the lighter areas? I'm not seeing any here at all. ​

Could you define the mud or maybe sharpen it? I'm having trouble seeing it. 02:42, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups oof Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:58, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 21:51, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Talon (CG) - For Approval
Wow, love the new blanks! There's some things I need to correct (like the overly dark stomach/haunch shading) but I just wanted to get it up for now.  H A W K  F I R E  23:21, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the lightsource as well? Malina457 (talk) 00:23, November 4, 2018 (UTC)malina

Could you taper the stripe some? 00:41, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I do agree with Malina and Vec, can you lower the opacity of the shading when you fix the light source?Heyoitpotater (talk) 01:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also I added more mud :3  H A W K  F I R E  03:26, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 00:17, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but could you define the lighter areas on the image? I'm mainly only seeing shading throughout the main part of the body and it sort of throws off the pattern. Since I'm also having issues seeing the stripes, I think perhaps tweaking the areas without shading and expanding them might solve this. ​​

I can darken the stripes to make them more visible, but the dark shading on the <-- side of the body was intentional. I wanted to try a new shading style where it seems like most of the cat's body is hidden in shadows. His other images are very dark as well.  H A W K  F I R E  00:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I realize that, but I can see the pattern on those images. I can't with this one and the shadows obscure it a lot more than they would on other images. ​

I personally think its fine. I can see everything well on my screen. 01:05, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the pattern perfectly fine. Make sure all colors are the same though. 01:10, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but others (including myself) have gotten the exact same kinds of comments and have been made to change things, so I believe it should also apply here. It's not right to allow one thing to pass, while forcing almost everyone else to change their image. The shading does obscure the pattern here and I can't see it at all. ​

'''Reuploaded. '''Hopefully you think this looks better.  H A W K  F I R E  01:31, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I asked you to define the light- did you? I'm not seeing that in the file history.

Stormfur (CG) - For Approval
all colors are the same, this one just lacks the excessive amount of shading his other images have, so it looks lighter. ​​

Maybe define the face shading? I love this Malina457 (talk) 02:41, November 5, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Do you have a specific spot you'd like for me to define the shading? ​

Adding to Malina's critique by asking you to define shading everywhere because I cannot see it.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:03, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Alright, maybe this'll work? Definitely not used to these blanks yet, but I really do like them...

might be nitpicky but I think there wouldn't be light on the chest with this source. or at least the there'd be shading where the chest fur lineart is if u get what I mean 21:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)