Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

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Applefur (W) ~ CBA
Ah, what a fresh new day in PCA. Comments? 00:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe sharpen the mottles on her midriff? 00:34, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Icy on this one. Perhaps make them slightly less like texture as well?

re-up I tried (remember this is my first mottle) ;__; 00:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the mottles just a bit more? They kind of look like texture or highlights at the moment. ( teach me how to mottle this is hawt ) 13:37 Sat May 17

re-up 13:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head. Pretty! 18:00, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 18:04, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm.. Let's go with a CBA, shall we? This is lovely.

Willow (Ki) ~ For Approval
she's cute; I am so happy 00:08, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her right arm and her stomach (or blur it, whatever looks better) and possibly the shading on her forehead. 00:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes aren't showing yet; see here 23:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg to my left. 00:02, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 07:58, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ CBA
here we are 00:08, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading 00:32, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes may not be showing; see here 23:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the belly shading, and this will probably go for a CBA o3o 00:03, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reups yay c: If changes aren't showing, see here 07:58, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 21:10, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Star) ~ For Approval
Richard Nixon. 00:38, 17, 05, 2014

Possibly blur the spots on her flank a bit more? Looks nice. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thank you friend 8D 00:47, 17, 05, 2014

Good! notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC) I can't think of much else, anyone got something I'm missing?

Could you define the head shading just a bit? Jeez, her pattern is madness.

Shimmerpelt (Queen) - CBA
Wow, I've wanted to redo this for a while and I'm not happy about the tail..

Possibly lighten shading and/or highlight a bit? I'm having trouble seeing the lineart. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  14:45, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The pelt color is straight from her other images, and because she's described as night-black, I'd prefer to keep her this dark if no one minds? Of course, I'll gladly change it if others disgree with me.

Blur the tail shading a bit? It looks really thick and unblurred compared to the rest of the shading. Don't blur/smudge it to the left, do that to the right. It just needs to cover her tail a bit more and show it has shape to it. Blurring/smudging to the right should do that. c: 19:32, 05/17/2014

Re-uploaded.

CBA? I can't find anything wrong with this. 00:05, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Queen) - For Approval
First charart of approval started.. Sorry I don't know what I said. Anyway this is my first charart for approval, comments? :D -- Night Wolfy Moon  02:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur and add more depth to the shading. It looks quite flat. Love those eyes <3> 2:35 Sat May 17

Re-uploaded I made the shading a bit darker too. And thank you. The eyes are always my specialty :D -- Night Wolfy Moon   12:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Try defining the shading around the belly, it still looks a bit flat. Trunktail 15:50, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the back leg closest to us. The belly shading is fine- if anything, it just needs a little bit of blurring. Perhaps lighten the shading around the shoulder/head/chest to match the rest of the image (sorry for nitpickin g) 10:08 Sun May 18

Ok I'm doing that now, but you guys should keep in mind that I don't use GIMP I use Pixlr so I need to figure out how to do that now..... -- Night Wolfy Moon   13:56, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Tom (KP) ~ For Approval
Here's Tom. Not exactly my favorite character. Comments? 03:10, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading a bit, but they do look pretty neat.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 03:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and darken it a bit.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 16:28, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit more, but especially the shading on his right paw and haunch, and his face. I love his charart, amigo. 20:15, 05/18/2014

Darken it a bit more too. Not much, but just a little more.

Define the ear-pink 21:32, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the stripes some? They don't look so much as stripes as they do texture o3o 21:34, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The stripes are actually meant to be texture. Not sure if changes are showing yet. 22:04, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

If they are texture, then he needs stripes, since copper pretty much means ginger. 00:00, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did not realize that. 00:35, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't the stripes be ginger? After all, it's just his muzzle that's described as moleskin-brown o3o 00:36, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Do the stripes have to be ginger? I probably could change them, but it will be hard without redoing the whole image. 18:34, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

If he's copper, and if it doesn't mention that he has moleskin stripes, sorry, but yes, they have to =P. However, you can click the box that says "lock" (if you use GIMP) so you can paintbrush in the ginger without messing up the stripes. Also, add some stripes, and try not to make them triangle-ly. Wish you luck on this one man! c: 18:36, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There was no way I could have done the stripes without redoing the whole image. I originally made this on a school computer, which didn't have gimp and I wasn't able to download it, either. I was stuck using pixlr, and the only way I could blur the stripes without over-blurring them is if it was on the base layer. Now that I'm at home, I was able to restart using Gimp. I used all the same colors as before (except the stripes), but took off the texture. Hopefully this works. 19:43, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading some? 19:45, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but I'll change if someone else agrees. 19:48, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

I'll agree with Beebs- but remember, define doesn't mean darken, it means make it more visible, by whatever means you think is appropriate. I'm also not seeing very much light here and it looks like most of the image is in shadow? I think defining the depth might help here.

Emberkit (DotC) (StarClan Kit) - CBA
Not sure if I'm doing this right, but I drew Emberkit. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 03:57, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Woah, this is good for a first charart! The stripes seem to fade into the shading. Maybe define 'em some more? 03:59, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The file name should be File:Emberkit (DotC).star.png. Would you like me to rename it for you? All you'd have to do is continue reuploading under the renamed file, since we have naming conversions that we use here with our various images and templates and pages and such. This is amazing, Jayfrost!

Thanks Bbunlegs. :) I darkened the stripes a bit, hopefully they're more defined now. And thanks Snowed Lightning. I uploded it with a new image, and I followed the naming thing this time. I'll try to remember that. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I just realized I only tacked on the .star bit, I forgot the rest of the changes. Um. Sorry about that. Would you mind changing it? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. Just continue to reupload under the file I've named for you and you'll be good to go!

Thanks. :) Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:10, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

His chest is supposed to be white, correct? Is there any way you could make it more white? If not, that's okay with me. As for the eyes, I can't quite see where the whites are supposed to be..unless that's just me being blind. I'm sorry I'm being nitpicky- this is a wonderful image for your first charart on here.

I made the white on the chest and the white in the eyes stand out a bit more. Is that better? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:32, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Mmhmm. That looks quite a bit better to me. I'm really impressed with this so I'm gonna change the heading to "For Approval" and promote you to apprentice, since it's completely obvious you already know what you're doing.

Oh, wow. Thanks! :D Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:38, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Looks really good, Jay! Possibly define the eye color a bit more, I'm not sure it it's just me, but the color looks a bit flat. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  14:34, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Edited, tried to make the eye color stand out a bit more. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 15:31, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The "black" part of the eye could be darker. 15:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Edited, tried to make the pupil stand out more. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 16:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, for some reaosn, the changes don't seem to be showing up. Nevermind. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:57, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Absolutely amazing! I wish I could do charart this well (and that's coming from a warrior!). The muzzle, his left foreleg (the one on our right, and just at the shoulder) and eye lineart seems a bit blurred, and maybe lighten the shading on the chest near the legs and belly; the white looks a little gray. 23:00, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! :D I sharpened the outline, and I lightened the shading on the belly and legs a bit. Better? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 01:51, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the <<< foreleg (the one to my left) and this will be good c: 14:00, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

I darkened the shading a bit on that leg. Is that better? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 00:28, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, and since he looks so fabulous, let's try a CBA, because this looks very good c: 18:36, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Frog (Cat) (Ki) - For Approval
My first character art in a while, this time of Frog. Comments? Trunktail (talk) 13:18, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Removed thumbnail. The title should also be either 'Frog (Cat) (Ki) - For Approval' or 'For Evaluation' ( sorry its late and I'm not sure ) Anyway, I can't see a real light source, so define it, perhaps. This is really neat! c: 13:44 Sat May 17

Re-Uploaded. Is this better? Trunktail 14:14, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Frog (Cat).kit.png. Would you like me to rename it for you?

Yes please :3 Trunktail 15:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. There you go! Maybe define the tail shading a teeny bit?

Re-uploaded. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 15:48, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste outside of --> ear.

Re-uped -- <font color="34282C">Trunktail 17:46, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on his legs. 17:45, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I'm not sure if the changes are showing yet. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 19:20, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading some - it appears a bit flat. 00:07, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up, I still don't think the changes are showing. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 20:47, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (W) ~ CBA
nyan nyan <span style="">15:21 Sat May 17

Maybe lighten the shading a bit? Also, she looks a bit pupil-less, unless that was intentional? Other than that I can't see any problems with it. -- <font color="34282C">Trunktail 15:47, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Shading darkness is artist's choice, unless it's too light.

I'd also rather nor change the eyes. That's how I do them. <span style="">16:17 Sat May 17

CBA? Fabulous, Bert, fabulous. 00:02, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Whitethroat (Star) - For Approval
I'm not sure about how good this is, the earpink took FOREVER to get shaped right, any comments/questions/ideas? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:16, May 17, 2014 (UTC) (yay, first charart in 3 years!)

Define the shading and eye depth, as well as add some white to his chest. 17:18, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up (did it upload right?) <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:26, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

As for eyes, do you want me to darken the dark and lighten the light? I took the color from his warrior image... <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 17:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading and maybe thin out that white patch on his throat/chest area by a couple pixels on each side.

Re-Up. Does it look any different? I'm having problems with the file itself... <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:46, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 17:51, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Tried to make the earpink a bit more like the other's I've seen, did I do it? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:57, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

That's better, but there's some waste on the ear. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 18:16, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Got it! (right?) Thanks, I wouldn't have noticed it otherwise <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  18:21, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it has updated for me yet, but I can still see some waste. Also, could you bring the white on his chest up a bit higher. His other chararts have it going up to his chin. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 18:35, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Looks a little odd to me... is it just me again? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  18:47, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The file needs to be named File:Whitethroat.star.png in order to go with the templates and pages. Please go back to the other file and then you can just reupload over what's already there.

Re-Up: Did I rename it right? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  19:02, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Nope. See the blue link I gave you? Use that filename and just reupload over it.

Okay, I think I got it THIS time. Is there anything else I could do to tweak it? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  19:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's still waste outside of his left ear. <font color="34282C">Trunktail 20:23, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Waste should be gone now. <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  20:31, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Add a little more depth to his eyes. 01:06, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his middle. <span style="">10:11 Sun May 18

Re-Up. Not sure how much I can work on this today, so here you go (for now) I'll see if I can get the computer back tonight if needed. <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  13:08, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on his haunch, and add some depth to it. 17:42, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Re-did the shading completely. Look any better? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  17:55, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Not trying to be impatient, but is there anything else that could be tweaked/fixed? <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  20:57, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (Star) ~ For Approval
I'm not proud of this the shading is bothering me. But I did remove the waste, changes are just being a pain in the butt. 17:17, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Those eyes are amazing ~<3 <span style="">18:43 Sat May 17

Re-uploaded 11:58, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink some more, and define the shading on the face. 23:58, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Since he's black his nose needs to be black 01:07, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:51, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Dew (Ro) ~ CBA
I had no idea what it is meant by "splotchy, so I did a splotchy pattern and splotchy fur. I'm sorry Snowed of Lightning I couldn't hold back. Comments? <span style="">18:43 Sat May 17

It's fine, Hawk, my goodness. I think the splotchy-ness is good how it is, actually. Maybe give the ears a little more of a notch? They look like they're cut off..

Re-uploaded. <span style="">19:31 Sat May 17

Re-uploaded. Forgot a pixel <span style="">19:34 Sat May 17

Define the shading on the face a bit. wow omg hawk this is waaay better than what I can do ;__; 17:55, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks you Beebs <333   Are you kidding me you're lying to yourself. <span style="">18:22 Sun May 18

Let's try a CBA, since this looks fantastic, absolutely fantastic. 23:59, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Now this is the kind of charart I want to be able to do. Amazing! <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  21:04, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Nightwing (Q) - For Approval
New blank. Comments? <span style="">19:23, 05/17/2014

Blur the stomach shading a bit. Lookin' niiiice. <span style="">10:13 Sun May 18

Reups. I blurred most of the shading a little more. Sat there for like 20 mins working on her stomach shading, and it's not changing much. thank you berry<3  <span style="">16:58, 05/18/2014

Millie (Q) ~ For Approval
this pattern has caused pain in my hand argrrgrhh but at least its done 10:17, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around the front paws. .o. She looks gorgeous <span style="">10:34 Sun May 18

re-uploaded did I get it 00:54, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a touch on the face. She's purdy c: 01:27, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Mothflight (Kit) - For Evaluation
Why is it so smalllll? Anyways, yeah, I can't art, and I'm not entirely satisfied with the shading (Shading on white cats >3<) :c. Anyways I'm not sure if I should add highlights or not, so, yeah. Also, my computer perception is wacked lol. 17:17, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Not bad for a first-timer, Bird! Define and add some depth to the shading. 17:43, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Could you also blur the shading some? This looks nice, Bird. 17:47, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

This needs to named File:Mothflight.kit.png. You can reupload over the file that's already there, Bird- it was never approved.

Yeah, I know, but for some reason the old picture just kept overwriting my own. x3  23:56, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I kind of want to redo the shading entirely. 00:03, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

She's looking beautiful, Bird. Perhaps blur the edges of the shading a little more, and then give it some depth around the neck and legs? If you're not sure what I mean, you're more than welcome to come and ask me in the chat when you're online.

Flower (KP) - For Approval
I really hope I named this right… eheheheh… scar's kinda rusty…  Anywhoo… yay for rainbow collars and here's Flower! 19:57, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

It should be File:Flower (DTC).kittypet.png, but I can rename it for you if you want me to.


 * lol that might be easiest and saves a couple files to be deleted. Thanks Cloudy :) 20:26, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. There be you go.


 * thank you, dear c: 20:30, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 23:57, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:07, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, stunning. 20:06, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Splashnose (Q) ~ For Approval
hello children, here have this nice queen. Comments? 22:45, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

darnit, I wanted it... Whiten the streak on her nose, it looks more cream then white 22:47, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

re-up I'm sorry, Scar :c 22:54, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, especially on the belly.

re-up 23:10, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Looks amazing, Bbun! <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  21:03, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, Rocket, just a reminder for next time, but don't comment if you don't have any crtique to give o3o 21:04, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry... <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  21:05, May 19, 2014 (UTC) (me will just be quiet now)

Thornclaw (Alt. A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">20:33, 05/19/2014

Define the shading on the chest. Looks good! <font color="34282C">Trunktail 20:42, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

There is no shading on the chest ouo thanks amigo~   <span style="">20:46, 05/19/2014

Ah sorry, I meant the define the shading on the legs. This is what happens when I type late at night -w-' Le invitamos! <font color="34282C">Trunktail 20:59, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on that shoulder (if anyone else agrees?)? Looks like a dark line to me, but then again, that's me. <span style="font-family:Symbol; color:Purple; background:none; border:none; text-decoration:none; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  21:00, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reups. I'd rather not lighten the shading at all. I did define the leg shading and so some other touch-ups. <span style="">21:24, 05/19/2014

Lighten it just a smidge, dear? It does seem a liiiiittle bit dark, but I think a couple percentages and stuff on the opacity bar would be more than enough.

Lightningtail (Ro) ~ CBA
My baby is growing up ;-; All colors are from his other images, and I will not make him lighter.

Define the shading some? Fabulous, as always. 20:56, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you~

Because I am a dork and can't really see anything wrong with this, CBA? 21:31, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

This is actually pretty good Snow! :D It is one of your best. -- Night Wolfy Moon   21:47, May 19, 2014 (UTC)