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Dew Nose (Hunter) ~ For Approval
this did not turn out how I wanted it; rip Minkclaw Winter is coming. 21:59, October 4, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading Malina457 (talk) 22:27, October 4, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The black spots on her other images do not look as round and blotchy as these do. Try smuding them a bit into the fur.  SPO OKY FI RE  22:47, October 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 18:20, October 5, 2018 (UTC)

can you blur the stripes a tiny bit? I love that they are more sharm than most art I see, but they (with my wird eyes,) are hard to look at, Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:18, October 5, 2018 (UTC)

They're suppose to be sharp per this.. Can I get another opinion on that please? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 07:54, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

Hmm, it does appear the stripes in the other images seem more blurred, or maybe they're just thicker than the ones here.  SPO OKY FI RE  14:53, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

I also agree. The stripes on the other images appear slightly blurred. Not too much, though. 18:09, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

also, this may be your prefrance to do it like this, but on the others, the tail tip is white, and it looks to me, on yours, a splotch of white on the tail, it dosent reach the bottom if that makes sence. ~RAR =^.,.^= Im spoopy kittan! 00:39, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

The shading seems off on the white tail tip and looks like it's leaking a bit. Also the stomach looks a bit flat - other than that this is cute. 06:06, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

There's no shading on the stomach.. That's because that's the shading on the tail, I used red. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 12:04, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Would you be able to at least add a small bit of shading to show depth with the fur lineart? It looks extremely flat. The stripes are also a bit softer on the kit image than they are here, and I also agree with Owlbite's comment about the tail white; it should cover the entire tail tip. ​​​​

Re-Ups, I redid the shading. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:12, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white tail-tip, define it on the head and add some to the ears. The ears themselves wouldn't have no shading, since ears are a 3D object and there would definitely be something there to show the inner parts of the ears. Also, try and give some shape to the neck shading- I'm not really seeing any, when it should flow with the curves of the cat a little better and go up onto the top of the head with this source. ​​​

There's also shading leaking above the shoulder. 23:26, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Cloud, could you headline what you mean on the ears? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:50, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

I can't, since I'm honestly unsure how... but basically look at Gooseberry's hunter image for an idea, since this one uses a similar light source. You see how there's shading in the ear area? Unless that's not what you meant and I'm just stupid. ​​

I do understand actually, the image and Patch showed me where exactly it should be. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 11:03, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, hopefully this looks better. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 11:28, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

There's shading leaking around the tail and below the chin. 13:59, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 13:16, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail and face a bit. 23:05, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 14:50, October 10, 2018 (UTC)

Possibly make the eyes a bit lighter?

14:55, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 18:22, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

Make the black spots a bit darker, I'm not sure if I can see them.jxs 00:57, October 14, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

smooth out your shading a lot

I think the black spots are fine as I was just told to lighten and smooth them. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 04:07, October 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, Where are you seeing that it needs to be smoothed out? I went and smoothed some parts so hopefully this is better. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 21:55, October 15, 2018 (UTC)

Personally, I don't think the shading needs to be smoothed out. However, there is waste under the back feet.  SPO OKY FI RE  22:30, October 15, 2018 (UTC)

I still think the facial shading still needs to be smoothed out, or whatever that darker patch is

That's a black spot there. I think it's fine. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 09:32, October 16, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry, not so much on the face, but around the chin/neck. I don't believe that's a black patch.

Shading is leaking on the hind paw. You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   <span style="color:gold;font-family:Nothing You Could Do;font-size:18pt;text-shadow:darkslategray 2.5px 1.5px 1px;">patience.  22:07, October 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:22, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

there's supposed to be a black patch on her muzzle (see warrior image). the stripes should also br smoothed out to match the stule o her other images

Darken the stripes a little perhaps? And maybe thicken them. These appear lighter and thinner than on her other images.

15:26, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

The colors and thickness match the kit since it came first. ^to the black spots as well.since this is facing a different direction there wouldn't be a black spot on the face. The style of the stripes do match, if I remember correctly they don't have to match 100%. Could I get a second opinion on the atripes, please. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 16:59, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

imo the stripes appear darker and thicker on the kit like Patch said. For the black patch on the muzzle, I don't think Mink should add it since it's not shown on the kit or es (unless I'm blind which is a possibility - this pattern is hard to see). And idk where the black patches went prior, but there needs to some at least on the lower back, upper tail, the front paw closest to us, and on the front leg closest to us. And there's shading leaking below the chin. Sorry this pattern is giving you so much trouble! 21:24, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

I realize I forgot to turn the black layer back on rip me. I'll re-up on those in a bit. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 22:18, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Add some white to her nose too. If it's there, define it.

22:20, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, how much thicker should these stripes be? <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 22:26, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

I'd say as thick as the lower two haunch stripes is a safe bet. 22:36, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Nice. May wanna work on shading, Dew Nose looks very dark to me.jxs 01:35, October 18, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

The shading is fine.. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:39, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Likewise, the shading darkness is dark enough. Any darker it would be confused as the black markings, and any lighter would not show depth. 02:25, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Sure, it's dark enough, but it's not smoothed out enough, especially near the front side where the neck/front legs are. Please smooth it out. If you are going to dismiss comments please provide a reason instead of just saying "it's fine", because that's quite disrespectful to commenters. And what i mean by stripe style: look at the kit (and basically all of her other images), her stripes are smoother/darker/thicker than how you did them here. Sure, it doesn't have to match 100% but I'd be fine if it didn't look pretty obvious at first glance. Also, I agree that the stripes should be thicker, as the OA of the warrior image. Last note: there's waste under the chin.

Lioneye (unknown) ~ For Approval
unsure. 15:24, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Man, someone needs to get poor Lioneye approved! xD I think this looks really, really great. The shading needs be defined around her chin/jawline and perhaps on her lower chest some more.  SPO OKY FI RE  15:34, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thank ye. 17:35, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

I think there should be 1 or 2 very slim stripes over the paw...pads...fingers...digits lineart to match the other images. 23:28, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. like so? 00:08, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

there's like a stripe that's a bit oversmudged. if you're confused i can provide a screenshot. also no i have no idea how i even managed to get the original approved. 01:15, 10/18/2018 ​ 01:15, 10/18/2018 ​

Define your shading. Lioneye needs some more shading. You removed too much.jxs 01:38, October 18, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

Patch has done this style of shading numerous times for her images. The shading placement is fine. 02:21, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think that was the stripe you were talking about, but yeah if not you can screenshot it. 14:10, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Alder (Hunter) ~ For Approval
*cries* 22:40, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

This is seriously one of the most difficult patterns and I applaud you for taking it on! xD I think the shading is far too dark, it takes away from each color of the pattern, and it makes the base color look gray (which on her other images appears to be white).  SPO OKY FI RE  22:44, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Light then shading as Hawk said, as well as maybe smoothen out the shoulder shading. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:06, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I have a phobia of lightening shading. 23:21, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

I'd also like to add that the base is a very pale gray as Jayce said on one of the other submissions, but I can add more white and mix it up a bit if needed. I'm just going with the flow for this pattern lol 23:26, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

It looked like off-white to me on the other images but very pale gray definitely makes sense. It may have just been my computer screen. ^^ I think there could be a little more white on her shoulder and haunch though, like her warrior image.  SPO OKY FI RE  00:14, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Briarlight (Starclan) - For Approval
Hello! I've been slowly noticing that characters that are confirmed to be deceased have no sprites for their deceased counterparts. I do believe it wasn't said that Briarlight is in Starclan, so if a No residence sprite is needed, I would gladly make it for guys! I made this sprite without even thinking, but ended up saying it was too late and just post the picture now. The computer that I currently use cannot see dark colors well so it looks all black to me (even the highlights are barely noticeable). So advice is very highly appreciated. I did do this sprite on my phone, and my phone easily distributes dark colors well. Thank you for taking your time and reading this! LogdotEpoch (talk) 16:01, October 18, 2018 (UTC) (sorry for the weird errors)