Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 5

Lionblaze - Declined
Hi. I'm only just getting the hang of this! Here's my first contribution, Lionblaze! I did as best as I could, I hope it's OK... --Leopardstar&#39;s Ultimate fan 19:47, 7 November 2008 (UTC) Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan

Okay, there are a few things I would say about this: Firstly, I would personally say that LIonblaze has a slightly darker pelt colour than this. More of an orangey-brown than a sandy yellow. Also, there needs to be more tabby markings and they some more shading needs to be added. I would also make his eyes more of an orange too. His description says: 'golden tabby tom with amber eyes' --Sandstar12 19:56, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

OK, thanks for the tip, i will try and make it better! --Leopardstar&#39;s Ultimate fan 20:07, 7 November 2008 (UTC)Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan

Is that OK? Or should I add more shading? --Leopardstar&#39;s Ultimate fan 20:18, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

This is better than it was, I'm sure with the extremely high standards here that there is still some more work to do though. I would advise that you add some more shading and maybe tone down the orange stripes a little so that they are a darker shade of teh pelt colour and not so bright. Also, his ear needs to be a more pinkish colour, not yellow and needs to be blended in. This is a good improvement though--Sandstar12 20:23, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

There - I tried toimprove it. Is it better? ^_^ --Leopardstar&#39;s Ultimate fan 21:23, 7 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Its looking better, a little more shading could be added too. Remember to blur them together to make the colors smooth. -- Shim-Shim Shimmering Crystals 04:35, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

It actually needs a lot of shading. I can barely see it. G B 05:16, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Also, the tabby markings are very sharp against the pelt. They need to be blended. G B 05:19, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

OK, OK, sheesh! By the way, how do you blend it? I made it using paint, so.... --Leopardstar&#39;s Ultimate fan 13:43, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

First off, the colors are done very well. :D If you're using a program like paint, you could use progressively lighter (or darker) colors next to each other to show shading/blending. I'm not very good at explaining things, but I hope it helps either way!! -Hazelflower 15:50, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Hm... Paint doesn't have blurtool, so it's very hard to use paint and make images. I used to use just Paint, and it was a nightmare! Now I color my images with paint, and edit them with GIMP. Anyway, you should probably download GIMP. Here's a link: G B  15:57, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

This isn't blending. All you did was outline the tabby markings. Now they look strange, and they're still sharply defined from his pelt. G B 16:20, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

I know, i know. that was with paint. I'll try downloading that GIMP you were on about. --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 15:20, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

OK, I used GIMP, and this is what I got! --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 15:39, 9 November 2008 (UTC)


 * GB take it easy this is Leopardstar's first work. As for Lepardstar, I see some of the shading and don't forget to add some to his back. I don't see any shading at all. You're improving a lot. -- Shim-Shim Shimmering Crystals 16:28, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Um, as far as I know, there is no "taking it easy on people"; I'm just telling her what is needed. Anyway, maybe just a little bit more blending, and the shading we all know and love. ;) G B 16:38, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

OK, I'll get to it! --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 16:47, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

There! Please comment! --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 08:19, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

Um... you never re-uploaded him. G B 14:42, 10 November 2008 (UTC)


 * I believe in a firm approach of 'no mercy'. If you submit here, the art is subjected to the expected standards. Respect and politeness are to be used to explaining the points for improvement, however. Now... The color choices I like, but shading and blending are lacking, as others have said... You do have a great start and it's a well done bit of work for it being your first go at this, but I do have one thing to say that the others haven't. It concerns the way the tabby markings are drawn, and the fact that Garfield-tabby won't be accepted as long as I have any say in this project.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 15:37, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

OK.... So, different markings, and more shading and blending? I will try! --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 14:57, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Declined for lack-of-progress. Once you've gotten corrections made, feel free to resubmit.  Kitsufox Fox's Den 16:29, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Whitewing - Declined
My second coloured image. Tell me if I need more shading! --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 15:28, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

She looks too white. I think it needs more shading to make it look more 3-D. Plus, the inside of the ear should have a color(I reccomend pink) In my mind, I always imagined Whitewing's eyes to be a darker green.Mallinois 15:38, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

OK, thanks, I'll start improving. There, I made a new version! Is it any better? --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 15:53, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

I don't think shading is supposed to stretch out to her neck like that. Also, the eyes looks gray. She has green eyes. G B 16:11, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

And I just noticed, she has a blue line under her. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B 00:15, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Her eyes AREN'T grey! They're Olive Green! *sighs* Can't I get anything right? --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 15:21, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

OK, is that better? --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 15:23, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

I think that when the shading stretched out out along the neck looked great. I t made Whitewing look more muscular. The eyes don't look gray to me. plus, have you tried blending the ear? If you use paint(which Ihave) let the image sit for awwhile and the program blends the image itsself.Mallinois 18:13, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

So shading on the neck? I KNEW that was a good idea, but GB thought otherwise... *sigh* --: Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 14:59, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
 * GB's opinion of how things should look does not always line up with those of the folks running the project. The image needs more shading. It needs to be over the whole image. This means no leaving out the head ;) I'd also like to see the ear pink blended a bit more. Nice start. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 17:46, 12 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Just a bit more shading, and, yes Kitsu, the pink in the ear needs some blending. Also, the shading needs to be blended. therwise, great job! F  x  C  18:18, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Lack of progress decline in an effort to reduce clutter. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 16:30, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Rainwhisker - Declined
While I'm waiting on the conclusion on whethed I should do Moonflower as a warrior base or not, I did Rainwhisker. -- Bramble Bramble's Realm 01:22, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Cool!I love it.-- Alice 01:56, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay I know what Kitsu's going to say, and I agree, too blue no offense.--Redflare 20:23, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

I dunno - I like the colour actually...-- Sandy 17:44, 19 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Might be my laptop screen, but I don't really think it's too blue... It looks like a very rich, deep gray to me... Could use a few highlights in addition to the shading it's got, though. Redflair... I'd prefer if I was left to draw my conclusions and people wouldn't put words in my mouth ;) Y'all can't see into my head, as I can't see into yours. Bramble... Might want to shade the muzzle, too. And blend the ear-pink some. Great start, though. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 22:31, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Lack of progress decline due to the fact that I declined another one pending this long. Tweak and resubmit and you'll be good to go, probably. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 16:36, 25 November 2008 (UTC)