Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Swiftbreeze(Star) ~ Tweaked
Might not match the pattern Spooky's choosing, but this is beautiful imo. Goin' to brighten up the white face, as I'm aware it is pretty much a pale gray 23:15, 4/16/2017

Fixed. 23:19, 4/16/2017

It actually goes on the chin 00:29, 4/17/2017

The white goes to the chin? 00:57, 4/17/2017

No, and i don't know what Snow is trying to say.

Scratch that. Sorry. :P I actually think it may go to the chin.

So are you saying I should expand the white to the chin??? 03:39, 4/17/2017

You should probably ask Snow for clarification. :P Sorry for the hassle.

Never mind, the white on the warrior was moved 18:09, 4/17/2017

Idk, but the white ends exactly at the muzzle line makes it look kinda... odd? I suggest smudging it it a bit so it's not like, exactly there :P

I don't think I will, because the others will have to have the white smudged past the muzzle, but if others disagree, I will smooth it out 00:36, 4/19/2017

It could stand to be smoothed slightly. Not so that it's past the muzzle, but enough so it's not so much of a stark contrast. I did that when I tweaked the queen of the set, so. Also, you didn't reserve this, so I'd suggest doing that.

Fixed. Think I got it 02:50, 4/20/2017

Swiftbreeze ​(W) ~ Tweaked
Not exactly sure if it matches the StarClan pattern since it's at a different angle, but here we go! 23:22, 4/16/2017

There's a few facial stripes on the star image that aren't on here. 23:33, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Fixed. Think I got 'em 23:41, 4/16/2017

Recede the white on the underside of the chin slightly, only because on the star that's tweaked above, you left the chin gray. So just to match it right

I think you missed the stripe that stretches from one eye to the other. About half of it would be visible here. 00:50, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Fixed the white 00:59, 4/17/2017

I think there's still some dark stripes missing on the face that is present on the star image. The ones leading from the eyes. 23:51, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes are there, but they're very pale and hard to see against the colors 00:34, 4/19/2017

Can you define those stripes, then? They should be more visible, because as you said, they're pretty pale against the base.

And, sorry for double comment, but because of the star, the white should stretch at least little more --> way

Rosetail (A) - Tweaked
OAs were Scarletwind, Mistypebble, Bbun, and tweaked by Trollsky. Tweaked for gray fur and bushy tail. 01:23, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the tail shading a little bit? Something about that tail seems different, just can't put my paw on it 02:00, 4/19/2017

I agree, Broken. I can't put my finger on it though... maybe the angle? Could your smoothen the red into the gray a bit and see if that changes anything? 02:08, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:51, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Should there be shading on the <-- earpink? I mean, the rest of the ear and that side of the face is shaded, so I just kinda figured. Correct me if it works with the source, though. 02:53, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:48, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) ~ Tweaked
OA paleclaw with a tweak by me. tweaked for white ears

It's white tipped, and you have the white on the entire ear. It's supposed to be on the tips. :P

Re-uploaded

Hawkwing (D) ~ Tweaked
OA is me, for being made tabby

He looks a bit like Darkstripe. Smudge the stripes on the tail a tiny bit? 19:50, 4/18/2017

Reuploaded

Reuploaded accidentally hid a texture layer before

Spottedleaf (K) ~ Tweaked
OA is Paleclaw, tweaked to have white tipped ears.

Sparrow Fur (ES) ~ Redone
Was definitely not in the right mood and condition when doing this... Dx

can you like smooth out the "fur" lines? :p

Sparrow Fur (Ki) ~ Redone
....i blame everything on the kit blank  OA was me, redone to have ginger/black.

Hawkwing (W) ~ Tweaked
OA is me, for being made tabby

Sagenose (W) ~ Tweaked
19:58, April 19, 2017 (UTC)