Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to darken shading, define earpink, and blur facewhite. OA was some crazy person. 23:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and define the shading. 23:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:47, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white on the muzzle some more. 18:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hate the shading with a firey passion. I miss GIMP :( 21:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights(?) and the shading looks flat, try defining it more. 22:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading since they seem blotchy. 00:47 Mon Jul 9

Reuploaded 22:59, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading slimmer, blur it more, darken it, define the white patch, and make the edges smoother. 23:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:08, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks blotchy. Make it smoother and blur it more into the pelt, and make the white patch smoother. 22:23, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her front leg. 19:34, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach and haunch shading. There's also a strip of shading on the back - blur that, or remove it, since the light source is coming from there. 14:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing yet. 06:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 22:24, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

This could just be me but there is a white pixel on the front left "elbow" (has no idea about anatomy) also lighten the shoulder "highlight" 00:59, 12, 07, 2012

Hussar (Lo) - Tweaked
Defined the scar, along with a few minorly minor changes. :3 OA's were Evanphoto (I think), minor tweak by Bramble, Cloudy and Rainfacestar. Comments? 07:10, 09, 07, 2012

Could you sharpen the scar a tad? It'll make it more realistic. 18:16, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  o3o I forgot that tool existed changes might not be showing. 06:24, 10, 07, 2012

Can you blur the highlights just a tad? 15:12, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hazeltail (Ki) - Tweaked
Ew... Made the facial marking not go over her eye. OA I think was Rainwhisper. Comments? o.e 07:53, 09, 07, 2012

Can you define the shading while your at it? Skt Omnia vincit amor  02:27, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  06:37, 10, 07, 2012

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded Ikilledit 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor  00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanfur (KP) - Redone
WOOHOO I FAIL. Same as the warrior^ OA was Ashshadow. 21:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it's not that dark on the warrior. And kill the waste. And shush, you don't fail. This is /wonderful/, as always. 21:05, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. x.x 21:12, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the lighter part on his foreleg? And Loon. >:| What'd I say I'd do if you didn't admit it was awesome? I'd call you a liar and slap you with the frozen butterfingerz (Then proceed to let you keep it but...)  23:35, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:34, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define/add shading on his back paw maybe? Skt Omnia vincit amor  22:45, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add another tear in his left ear to match the warrior. 00:54, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Paleh, since his ear is facing sideways (you can't see the earpink), you wouldn't be able to see both tears. 01:37, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Loonie, go ahead and make this match the old pattern.

Re-uploaded. Mounty said I could change the pattern from hers. 22:02, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that dark bit of shadong on his back. Skt Omnia vincit amor  00:37, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Shading needed to be redone, plus I darkened her to match the apprentice. Most recent OA was Iceheart. 17:03, July 10, 2012 (UTC)\

O.O You made a new file. Enlarge the earpink on <-- That side. 17:04, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the file name, even if the image isn't showing >_>. Also just did the earpink. 17:09, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad.

Reuploaded Lighten the shading to about 90. 19:25, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (A) - Tweaked
OA was some epical Guildmaster. Added mottles 18:27, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and make it match her warrior? 20:18, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  03:21, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and (I think) make the mottles smaller to match more. 05:50, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded 23:59, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, shading needed defined. I'm thinking the stripes might need to have their opacity lowered a tad to match the loner, but that's for you guys to decide 21:47, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think if you blurred the stripes a little, they'd match just fine. Breeze whisker  00:48, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be mottled. I made him match the alt I made as best as I could, of course not exactly so the pattern could fit the curve of his body. 21:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I know this wasn't why it was up for tweaking, but may you please darken the shading? 22:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make some parts of the mottle more darker. 05:53, 11, 07, 2012

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just darkened it to match the other images. Latest change was made by Misty. Comments? ^^ 00:07, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Misty already did this tweak. It doesn't need to be done again... 01:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Misty's tweak was declined due to the one week limit, but it was never reverted. Cinder, blur the stomach shading, please.

Oh, Ok. I just thought it was approved since it was never reverted. :P Darken the highlights a tad. 04:26, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleclaw what do you mean by darken it? XP Sorry I'm not very good with vocabulary. 19:13, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt. L) ~ Tweaked
OA was Specklestream, and the highlights needed toning down. I also tweaked the shading in the process. Color may have gotten a little..changed...in the process though. I also added depth to the eyes, since they were just one solid color. e.e

This is very minor, but make the white specks in the eyes on the same side. Either both on the left, or both on the right, not one on each side. 00:33, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur the leg shading a bit 01:36, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. But, if others disagree, I'll fix it.

So much better than mine *Bows to Cloudy's epical superiority on solid colored cats* Define the light on the face a bit more 02:06, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love my solid cats, what can I say? xD

Might just wanna blur the tail shading a teeny bit. 05:59, 11, 07, 2012

Nah, I'd rather not...but, if others think I should, then I will.

I think the shading should be blurred. 15:32, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Oakheart (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Dewstar, and it needed to match the alt deputy. I think the shading might be a tad too dark...

Lighten it up, it still doesn't match the alt deputy's color. 00:31, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Lighten the shading a bit. 06:04, 11, 07, 2012

I think it's fine.

Actually, can you lighten or blur it a bit. 19:47, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, sure.

Willowpelt (Q) - Redone
Trying out a new placement for queen shading... hope this works. Needed to match other images, OA was Twitty. Got the layers from Mounty, so all the colors match. Don't ask me to change them. Comments? 00:25, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you change the light source on the tain to the top so that it matches the rest of the image? Breeze whisker  00:46, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm assuming you mean tail? And the light source is coming from the top left corner. The tail pretty much does match it. The only other place I could put the lighter area, would be on the other side of the tail, which wouldn't match the light source. This is about as close to the "top" of the tail as I can get. 00:56, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, hehe yes, the tail. Then maybe extend the shading a little from the rump on the bottom of it? Breeze whisker  01:04, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - That's the best I can do. 01:12, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her neck and chest. 14:21, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the face and tail shading just a tad? 15:11, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Would rather not blur the face shading, it starts to look messy if it's blurred any more. 00:02, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Willowpelt (Ki) - Tweaked
I know this was meant to be redone, but looking at the original image, I figured it could be tweaked. Just darkened the image a tad, added a layer of shading so it was more defined, then fixed the eyes and earpink to match the other images. Same reasons as queen. OA was Teldy I think. Since I didn't have all the layers on this, I don't have the colors, but comparing the base layer, it does match the colors mounty, sent me, soo..... comments? 00:28, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) - Tweaked
- Had to be brought back to the color she was before. I also re-did the shading and made the eye have a pupil - and I fixed up the earpink. Comments? 18:24, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Waste. I'll kill it in the next upload. 18:24, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading just a bit.

Re-Uploaded: Blurred next shading; also toned down the shading because I felt it was rather off. If people disagree, I'll gladly change it. 18:32, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

did you use the male blank? o.o. otherwise blur the shading a bit more 21:23, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I didn't know until it was too late. 21:25, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Bleh I fail in the morning (11:47 = morning now) She needed floof. OA was Breezy. Comments? 18:48 Wed Jul 11

Rowanfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was Ashshadow I think... Comments? 19:30 Wed Jul 11

Define the ear pink just a bit. Oh, those paws. xD

Can you possibly make him a tiny bit more ginger? It might be Chrome, but he looks a little too reddish-brown. 19:34, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think this shade it fine. o3o oyus the paws  19:37 Wed Jul 11

Yeah, the shade's fine. Isn't this actual ginger anyways? I mean, he's not supposed to be full-on orange or something like that.. xD

What? I thought we were just going to tweak him since only the shading was wrong. Breeze whisker  19:42, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

No. He was still nominated for a redo, provided the style be kept. Which, Mounty has.

Blur the pale and dark ginger transistions. 19:47, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought the pale ginger was fine. o3o 19:51 Wed Jul 11

Yes. In the comments underneath we said he probably could just be tweaked since "there was nothing wrong with the old pattern" and the shading was then really the only thing. >.> Breeze  whisker  19:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but the stripes looked painted on. Regardless, it got three yay votes, and the pattern is the same, save for the pale ginger parts, which I've got no issues with.

This was more current than the nomination. I would think it would be the one that we would go with, regardless of what went on during the nomination. Especially since the stripes look no more painted on than many of the rest of the tabby chararts. Breeze whisker  20:04, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

The nomination was valid, for whatever reason. There's no need to renominate an image that already passed the voting for a redo. Just because an image is declined, does not mean we need to renominate.

Edit conflict darn you. Anyway, only one person suggested a tweak while four people voted on a nomination that is still in effect. And it was more than just stripes. With the shading and color it would have been simpler to just redo it. 20:14 Wed Jul 11

Re-uploaded Redid it to match the kittypet <3 22:39 Wed Jul 11

Blur the neck shading. <3 Skt Omnia vincit amor 22:45, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:52 Wed Jul 11

Lighten the shading in between the back and stomach. Beautiful C: 22:58, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies 8D 23:26 Wed Jul 11