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Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more 18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please 01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs 21:32, 5/15/2017

Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more 00:56, 5/17/2017

Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

What means tad? – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

tad means a little bit.

Do I have to do something with legs? – 07:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

All you have to do is smooth the shading more over the whole image, and define the speckles a little bit in the shading 13:55, 5/18/2017

Reupload – 08:56, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin out the shading on her stomach a little? After that I think it'll be good to go. If I wasn't very specific, you can just say that. Basically what I meant is like the shading up from the haunch. 20:20, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken the speckles even more? Also if you're American you might be forgiven for not knowing tad, it's chiefly british --

I am russian ::::\ – 13:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

I noticed no one ever answered your question about shading depth and I still think it could be defined so here's an image of one of the apprentice tutorials, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:BCPrincess73.tutorial.png, which mentions shading depth so I hope that helps you

Reupload Would you like some vanilla ice cream with chocolate chips? – 10:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

It looks white, and less creamy white 19:39, 5/22/2017

Smooth out the body shading

Reupload – 08:21, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The shading could be smoothed more. 13:30, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

i dunno XXXX| – 15:45, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible or define it a bit more? It's hard to see it on my screen. Unless others see it just fine on their screens. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 02:37, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

I do think it wouldn't hurt to smooth just the neck shading. 20:17, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Are you really sure? – 06:55, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

well people dont generally just say things for the sake of it so yeah they're sure lol. anyway to fix the problem just ligten it by like 10% or smth then gaussian blur if ur lazy and patch up the leaking areas. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:13, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload What means "patch up the leaking areas" – 15:49, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the earpink a little not more? I'm still having trouble visualizing it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 18:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the neck shading again and also smooth out the tail-tip shading? And also, to answer, patching up leaking areas is referring to the shading-away-from-the-lineart leakage that sometimes happen when gaussian blurring, so yeah.^^

Smooth out the shading on the hips and shoulder/chest a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:32, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 13:42, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink more? 15:26, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit, it looks kinda dark to me. --  Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  04:28,5/28/2017

After you define the earpink, smudge it a bit? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 00:11, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

I am still working – 15:56, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload

Smooth out the shading on the tail tip and the neck area

to save you some time from other ppl commenting tbh just smooth out all of the shading in general   Life actually sucks 24/7   so    lol 11:49, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Still

Reupload – 11:12, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink

You've been asked to define the ear pink multiple times and to save you some trouble of getting asked even more, just darken it a few shades.

Reupload – 08:47, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Declined due to the one month limit <span style="">12:57, 6/09/2017

to be honest, this image went 2 days without comments. i don't think its fair to just decline it when no one commented.

It wasn't declined because of that, it was declined because images can't stay up for approval for more than 1 month, because it takes up space and such. The rule is there for a reason. <span style="">20:14, 6/09/2017

Broken, it seems like you're talking down on Fox. Knock it off; you're not a lead, and Fox used to be one, I'm pretty sure she knows the rules. Anyways, she has an extremely valid point and Shine will be given the extra two days.

Can you define the earpink again? Sorry but I still can't see it very well.

Define shading depth? 23:41, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, my God. How long must I wait? I'm not going to run around here. – 10:04, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 11:13, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

I have nothing really to say except that youre being a bit rude :/, look on the bright side your image wasn't declined Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:04, June 11, 2017 (UTC)chat

I am sorry, but I do not understand anything. Everything is so confused and blurry, at least for me – 08:31, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the ear pink a little more or change the color do a darker pink to make it stand out more? Just a suggestion.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 23:52, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

I dunno – 08:02, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

An extra 4 days over the month limit has been given, and previously it said only 2 extra were warranted, so this is now declined due to that limit.


 * / So pity – 08:04, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

I'll take over. 19:13, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

wait, i have it reserved... may i take over? either how, i have the image done + reserved, so i reuploaded over this. of course, if this image is rightfully bluestars then she can reupload over mine and take it over. Life actually sucks 24/7  so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 03:20, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Go ahead and take it. 03:59, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Who's working on this image? Because when someone's image is declined after one month limit, I thought the person who took it originally wouldn't be allowed to work on it for..4 days? <span style="">04:03, 6/15/2017

As for the image itself, define the shading and the speckles. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:06, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Shine originally worked on it and burnt took over after.

Would anyone object to me archiving this section to give Burnt a fresh start? I don't want people thinking that she's had this image since May, since people have a habit of not reading. Also, Broken, the one month limit means that someone cannot take it for two weeks afterwards. It's on the top of the page.

1. thank you bluestar :0 (sorry man ;w;) 2. ill post the new image with critique fixed when this is achieved :) (someone pls give me a tip on how to define those nasty speckles.....)   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:21, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
She's back you guys. (Snowdapple said I could post this after it was archived so here ya go)

Near the tail diagonal almost from the very back patch, the shading's a little blotchy. 00:21, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading

smooth the shading.

re-up Why won't you smooth out????

There's a little bit of leaking shading where the body meets the tail. 01:22, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

you think you could remove some of the white dots in the pupil? it makes it hard to see

re-up There's no leaking shading, it's probably just the texture.

No, look at the area I circled in red. The patch of shading I was trying to point out to you doesn't touch the lineart at all and also looks kind of hard edged. If it's texture, you should probably smooth it out there or whatnot because the shading really does appear to be leaking. 20:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Eh, not too happy.

its not like ivy's suggestion damaged ur image lol. just had to point that out. Life actually sucks 24/7  so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:50, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the brown patch on the > front leg could be a little bigger, as it seems to cover more length on the apprentice

re-up Redid the texture because I didn't like it.

Beautiful! Maybe define the texture just a tiny bit? Good job! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:57, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you add a tiny bit of shading on <- ear?

Prehaps define the tail shading better <span style="">21:26, 6/06/2017

re-up Thanks Cosmo!

Define the facial shading better. <span style="">01:53, 6/09/2017

Define the shading depth. 01:57, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

re-up may lighten shading

Define the earpink 12:45, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out and/or lighten the shading a little? 12:51, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Let me know if it needs smoothing.

The shading depth could at least be smoothed out a little. Great job! This is really pretty. 01:12, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Thanks Shy!

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the face and tail. Looks nice!

re-up thanks! ^^

Sweetbriar (W) - For Approval
<span style="">16:26 Wed May 31

These stripes are a bit too sharp. I know you probably did it the same way on the kit, and the StarClan is the same way, but this really should be smudged a fair bit more.

Reuploaded Also made the muzzle shading look less like a stripe. <span style="">23:56 Wed May 31

Define the shading depth on the main body

Smoothen out the white chest. 22:23, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

tbh i think the chest is fine cuz its the same style as her other images   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 11:41, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

I know you're the OA of the kit, but are you sure the white should cover the entire chest like that? It seems like it only covers a little bit of the chest on the kit, queen and star. Also, I agree the white could be softened just a bit <span style="">23:40, 6/03/2017

Still working?

Reuploaded I was visiting a friend from college for a while. <span style="">18:14 Tue Jun 6

This is pretty. Smooth the shading on the tail tip, seems pretty hard-edged. <span style="">04:06, 6/08/2017

There's a really dark stripe on the neck, if it's a stripe, leave it alone, if it's shading, smooth it out

Still working? 13:09, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate this shading. <span style="">16:41 Mon Jun 12

Furled Bracken (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Comments? 17:09, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and blur the stripes a little more. They look softer on his other images. 17:48, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:00, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there are more stripes on the ancient and sharpclaw. Also, smooth the shading some more everywhere. <span style="">18:52, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Okay, I added a tail stripe and a haunch stripe, but if this needs more stripes still then I'll add more. :P 19:18, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I really think you should add stripes at least to the tail. There are 13 stripes (I think I counted right) on the tails of both of the other images, whereas this only has eight, which is significantly less. 20:14, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes look blotchy, and the shading, I can't tell the difference. Did ya smooth it? <span style="">21:35, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Well, I sure did try! :) 21:47, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The face stripes don't appear to match the other images

Reuploaded I'm going off of the ancient image. 22:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say that the sharpclaw image is first in the set. 22:54, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah. You gotta match both of 'em Shy. Also, well done on the approved images of yours. I'm genuinely proud of you on your progress. <span style="">22:56, 6/06/2017

Perhaps you could give some shape to the haunch shading? Also, the shading seems to be leaking in some places. 18:40, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you so much, Broken! 19:38, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add more stripes to his --> leg or haunch thing? And his like shoulder chest area? It has more on his other images Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded 21:08, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the line art in a few places all around the image.

Can you please redline them? 01:42, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I mean, it's sorta,,, everywhere

Reuploaded 17:56, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the hard-edged lines in the earpink, and smooth out all the shading all over the image, it doesn't look different then the other uploads where I've told you to smooth it out <span style="">19:33, 6/08/2017

Reuploaded 20:11, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

For the stripes on the tail, especially the part closest to the body, can you make them reach the lineart? Some of them seem to just stop a little before the lineart. For the stripes on the main body, can you make them taper a bit? 16:19, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:20, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the stripes. 18:13, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little and smooth out that bit of shading on the back

Reuploaded 19:34, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the right front leg. 12:48, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:16, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

I still think that the stripes should be tapered a bit. 19:38, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:21, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Smooth shading near the rear?(No rhyme intended! :P) 21:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad, and define the light on <-- paw. Also, I belive there is leaking shading on --> back paw, and eye color leaking outside the lineart. <span style="">21:39, 6/06/2017

Reups Thanks Shypaw! And broken, the front paw you're talking about isn't supposed to have any light on it. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, maybe add some shading to the <--- ear (just a tad) and darken the nose colour? 22:15, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there is any nose color, and if there is, define it a bit <span style="">22:33, 6/06/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the front paw farthest from us. Also, lighten the shading a little bit? 22:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused with your shading placement. The shading on the tail, back, and chest/neck area indicate that the light is coming from <--- (from the right/behind the cat) while the legs, haunches, and head indicate that the light is coming from the ---> (from the left/in front of the cat). I believe you're going to have to switch one of these in order for it to make sense. 23:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I switched around the shading. Is it better now? --ErmineGlow (talk) 13:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading around the belly and definitely the face shading need to be swapped now. Also, define the light on the closest hind paw.

Vec said that if I only switched on of the shading parts around, I would be good. I switched around the legs and haunches, so I don't think I need to swap the chest/belly and face shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I made a mistake (mostly because I was super tired when I wrote that, but that's not important); the head shading needs to be swapped (covering more of the <--- face with the light coming from the <---). Don't only just take my word. That's why there are other people here. I'm bound to make mistakes (like I just did). Danny's got a good eye for critiques. As for the belly shading, I personally think it's optional (artist's choice) for this shading perspective. If you're keeping it, I think it should be swapped so it hugs the foreleg instead of the hind leg. Or you could make it just emcompass the lower part of the belly. 23:28, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

The shading's leaking a little bit on the lower chest and the haunch, and I think the earpink might be layered over the lineart in ---> ear? 22:35, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on his back and some in the upper left corner of the image. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 13:34, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and the closest back leg/paw

There's some waste on the back and above the head. 19:04, June 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * Opps, I didn't mean leaking, what I meant was waste! Lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 19:11, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

There is still some shading leaking on the back leg closest to us. 13:00, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:21, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's leaking shading almost everywhere, see here http://vvcap.com/sJTZiQGhuRX <span style="">09:38, 6/11/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:37, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define <--- earpink. 18:15, June 11, 2017 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:49, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Add some light to the back leg furthest from us? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 23:46, June 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * Not light, I mean shading. My bad. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:01, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:32, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the haunch a little bit

Re-ups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:26, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is still leaking on the haunch. 01:33, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

The highlight in the eyes needs to be in the provided hole in the pupil I think

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:10, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste all around the back. 23:22, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:25, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the closest back paw. Not the leg, just the paw

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:46, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Thrushwing (A) - CBA
Colors from her other images. The shading looks kinda crazy so I'll fix that.

Prehaps define the patten beneath the shading Patch, I can't make it out too well <span style="">19:24, 6/08/2017

Re-uploaded Redid the shading. Did that help with the pattern? 23:14, June 8, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell if that flank brown is shading or part of the pattern. <span style="">03:01, 6/09/2017

That's part of the pattern. I only put shading on the belly (near the chest) and behind the leg, so only a little part of the brown is in shading. 13:55, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading

re-uploaded. 12:43, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Acorntail (W) ~ CBA
sigh school's over. just an image to start off the summer hh

i screwed up and named this acornfur, if someone can rename this i'll appreciate it a lot

Maybe just reupload over Acorntail's warrior file and change it; I have no clue, I've been awake the whole night and can't think properly. Anyways, prehaps ask Patch for the deputy or apprentice, the stripe pattern doesn't seem to match. <span style="">09:56, 6/10/2017

Re-uploaded I'll just wait for an admin to come and rename it

Renamed.

This is beautiful ^^ The stripes on the top of his hindleg are more a circular looking (if that makes sense) I still have the apprentice file if you need it. 12:23, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sure. just send it to thefoxgirl15@yahoo.com. Thanks!

CBA?

Raven Pelt (W) ~ For Approval
The only thing I like is the texture and the colors are from the rogue. -- 17:47, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs and it seems as thought there's some extra lineart underneath both paws closest to us. 19:14, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the texture

Reups I'm...not sure what to do about the "extra lineart" since I don't see any. Could I have a redline, please? -- 19:34, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't know how to redline. I double checked to make sure it wasn't just my eyes and it was, sorry for the confusion. :) 19:42, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

I know it was said above, but the texture really needs to be defined imo. <span style="">23:37, 6/12/2017

Reups --  16:49, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten him up. I can hardly make out anything save for the eye color and earpink, and my screen makes things seem lighter than they are. 00:22, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Violet Dawn (W) - For Approval
Okay cool

It might just be me, but I can't see the art... -- 18:35, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

How bout now?

I can see the image. Add some shading to the front paw furthest from us. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 18:50, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yup, see it now. Maybe define shading depth on the back and possibly the tail? -- 18:55, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

reups Really hated the shading. Redid it.

Smooth out the shading a little on by the front of her leg? 12:45, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups The little triangle of shading on the shoulder?? I think that's what you meant

Smooth out the texture a bit, especially on the face and by the ears. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:30, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I smoothed the face texture because I agree that it was rough but the rest of the texture is the same way I have it on her queen image so?? Her images have generally defined texture

Add a but of shape to the neck shading - maybe curve it some to shape the head, b/c it seems a little straight across atm

Icewing (Ro) - CBA
00:10, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

Re-uploaded. 17:38, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Dew Nose (W) ~ For Approval
I'm proud of this! Comments? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 18:53, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the stripes? This is super good! I love the nose. :) 19:21, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes are the same color as the ES, so I don't know if I should..? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 19:23, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

i don't think the color is the problem, it's the fact that they are over smudged. Perhaps unsmudge it a bit? (also this is cute :3)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Does this look better? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:15, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Seems too dark, and the pattern fades into the shading on the back. <span style="">04:45, 6/15/2017

Re-uploaded. It's the same colors, and there must be a lot of shading on the back, I suppose. Plus there's a black patch on the back. It must also be because of the color of shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:55, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups again. I tried making the stripes more visible under the shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:59, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Bristlekit (Star) ~ For Approval
Just to let an admin know, there are a bunch of unneeded and incorrect files for Bristlekit, if you just search up "File:Bristlekit" and see some. 23:02, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Can you colorpick from a lighter spot on the kit image? I can't really see the shading all that well.

Reuploaded Yeah, I agree it was a bit dark. 01:00, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

^^This is better. Define the light on the tail and smooth the shading some?

Reuploaded 01:23, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Is it my bad eyesight, because I see some texture on the kit. <span style="">03:00, 6/15/2017

I can't see it? Is there some? 03:28, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell myself, but maybe? http://vvcap.com/3M1TDzQVnSE <span style="">04:04, 6/15/2017

I can't tell either. Is Spooky around to confirm or deny this? :) 04:18, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Spooky isn't the OA, Winter. Please make sure to check the file history completely first. Raven is the OA (Diablo is their current username), and they do pop up from time to time. While it might seem like there's texture, I do know that Diablo has a very intricate shading style, and it's possible that might be what we're seeing. I think we can leave it as it is for now, and if it turns out that it is texture, then we have the tweak page for a reason.

Firestar (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
Shown as solid in the manga of BP; he has other alts for this, including one from the same manga. In case your wondering, no, this doesn't have texture, neither do his other alts for this; it's just the shading that makes it seem like it does. Comments? 04:32, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Prehaps soften the head stripes, they seem too sharp compared to the alt kittypet, although I haven't compared them. <span style="">04:49, 6/15/2017

Add some lighting to the back legs? I like this, good job, Bluestar! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 05:12, June 15, 2017 (UTC)