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Purdy (KP) - Redone
OA was Insane. The old colors didn't match and the pattern looked all smudgy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I don't think he would be all scraggly and torn like that when he was a kittypet, he probably got the tears and scars when he was a loner 05:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. His old charart had torn fur, so I'm going to leave that for now. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:27, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless, what Ivy said makes sense. I don't think he should have those patches either. 16:22, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when he got the patches, so I say just keep them. Maybe he got into fights as a kittypet or something. Anyways, it's what makes Purdy...well, Purdy! Keep 'em, Scarlet. 17:31, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste near his right foreleg. 01:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

The non-tabby part of the fur almost looks gray to me, dunno if that's just me or not. Did you color-pick from his elder? 01:15, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivy, yeah I did.

Blur the earpink and saturate the non-tabby part of the fur so it matches the elder. Also add some mottles to the tabby stripes so it matches the elder. Lookin' good, gurlll 08:22 Sun Dec 4

Re-uploaded.

Erase the waste to the far left of the image and make the shading on the collar more consistent by blurring it a bunch. Looks good ^^ 02:44 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. Redid the color. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 18:13, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rainbow collars! ..I love you. Blur the spots just a little. 21:21, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

There's also some waste near his right foreleg... Still <3 23:47, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

If you're keeping the patches, should you have the ragged ears as well? Sky.....  Just...dust and echoes 00:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ragged ears more consistent. 19:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:54, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (Lo) - Redone
BWAHAHAHAHA first image for a while. Color didn't match her leader image, shading/highlights needed to be redone. Blah blah blah. OA was Sandstar12. 20:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Snow, you need to darken your sig so people can read it... Anyway, the eyes on the leader have a ring of orange in them. 22:34, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 23:31 Fri Dec 2

Blur the shading. 16:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. -- 15:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 16:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangluar. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:16, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:14, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing (W) - Tweaked
Woo, original artist was Sandy and the shading needed to be tweaked. 04:56, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Pretty! 05:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Spur of the moment decision. Blurred and thanks! 06:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit. Theese eese bootifulll.... 08:29 Sun Dec 4

Blur the shading and define the earpink. 22:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the neck shading a bit. 23:50 Thu Dec 8

Oatwhisker (WC) (E) ~ Redone
I just realized I named the file wrong so it didn't reupload. I'll try to fix that. Anyways, OA = Bramble, and it was on the redo list because he needed to be more brownish cream, and the project has a disdain for triangle tabbies. Comments? 16:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes stand out a little more? 16:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a tad bit lighter and blur the rump shading more. This is really neat! 19:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlight on the rump bigger, blur the shading a bit more and lighten it. 21:55, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, please stop repeating what other people said. 22:28 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded. These stripes are so failish... 06:00, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Grrr. Trollsky smash wife. xD Perhaps make the earpink slightly bigger and blur? Sky.....  Just...dust and echoes 18:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I liek deh stripes. Could you make the colour a bit... warmer? *doesn't know how to explain* it's kinda dull right now. 02:30 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded. Done. I looked at it without shading and the color itself was pretty warm, so I added highlights and lightened the shading. 04:30, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (Ki) - Tweaked
Original Artist was Maplefern; patches needed to be dappled. Comments? Elorisa  17:14, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the patches less smudged and make the dapples more like the ones on her other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:10, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! So cute! Make <- this ear pink more triangular. Actually, make 'em both. And one is lighter/darker than the other ear-pink. 22:56 Sun Dec 4

Blur the patches. 23:10, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around her left and back paws. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:20, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and it needed to be longhaired. 17:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

define the shading on the white and smudge the stripes along the edges of the patch their in - 20:01, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 20:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Both ears need to be brown, not onl one, if you notice on his warrior 20:28, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, please 21:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, don't repeat things that have already been said. Smudge the paw on <--- that side a little bit. Darken the shading just a touch. 22:02, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:04, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate the brown and darken the markings. 20:08 Tue Dec 6

Darken the stripes - 23:02, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. Sky.....  Just...dust and echoes 00:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white a bit. 20:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fawnstep - Tweaked
Whew, one spot left! Shading needed darkening, OA= Hiddensun, and Rainwhisper added white paws after that. - 20:24, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list for this, but the eyes are very neon. Can you lighten or darken them to a more natural color? 20:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

And make the herbs a more natural colour also. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

A more natural color on the eyes and herbs, and the paws look a bit gray. 21:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow: Please refrain from repeating comments that have already been said. 22:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

And the paws are fine, it's just shading. 22:20 Sun Dec 4

Could you fix the shading on the paws? it's bothering me. It looks like there's parts of it that are lighter then it should be for shading. I'm not sure how you'd go about doing that though... Maybe add another layer and try and balance it out... 19:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think the paws look fine, honestly :3 but could you fix the one really bright white pixel near where the chest meets the legs? <span style="">02:36 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded - heh, Im so confused - 23:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste near her right paw :D 23:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Snaketail (E) - Tweaked
Can someone help me get rid of the waste? :3. It's tweaked, honest xD. Orginal artist was Ashshadow' Neede shading blurred and gray flecks on chin. Elorisa  01:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll hlp you get rid of the waste. One moment please. 01:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some white parts on the tail, and can you blur the shading a bit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There ya go Elo =3 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there, *Was requested to get rid of re-appearing waste* One seccond, then,. ^^ . 02:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks really blurred to me; fix that? <span style="">02:37 Tue Dec 6

But the lineart isn't blurred; I checked xD. Before I reuploaded. -- Elorisa   13:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It sure looks blurred though.... And there's still empty white specks on the tail and back ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:12, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is fine, I think. Blur the highlights. 18:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is blurred. I don't care that you say it isn't...it looks odd like that. Can you fix it, please? 23:09, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't even know how I'd fix it...>.> -- Elorisa   03:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it not so dark all around the lineart. And if you truly can't do that then maybe you should withdraw this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:57, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

So I'm supposed to withdraw something because I can't do something with it...>.>. I'll just redo it. ;-; -- Elorisa   21:37, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. If you're incapable of doing what is needed, you shouldn't be working on the charart. And do you mean re-tweak it, or redo it completely? Because you still do need permission to redo completely. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) - Redone
OA was Maplefern, with tweaks by Cloudskye and a redo by Icestorm. He needed his tawny head removed as that was a mistake and his stripes/mottles redone. I made him ginger with brown patches, as that is how I interpreted his description. I'm so happy I finally got a complicated charart. XD Comments? 07:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Brighten the haunch highlight. 20:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a tad. :3 21:41, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden it as well. 23:44, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. <span style="">01:14 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. 16:47, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink. This is prettyyy <span style="">20:04 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. 22:07, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Just darken the tail shading. 22:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the smudges some. 01:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the tail, but I'm not changing the smudges. 04:26, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit. I liek the smudgies 8D <span style="">02:03 Thu Dec 8

Re-uploaded. 17:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Give me a reason why you won't blur the smudges a little. I'm not saying totally get rid of the smudging by blurring, I'm saying to make the smudges a bit softer by blurring. 20:39, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Kestrelflight. That's my reason. This is practically blurry next to him, and his charart is widely regarded as amazing. I like my charart like this, and I'd prefer to leave it be. 21:08, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Whatever. I just thought it'd look smoother. Doesn't matter, do it your own way. It's your redo :P

Graypool (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I did her warrior, might as well do her kit as well. Fixed shading and highlights. OA was Pantherstorm. I did my best to get all of the waste off, if you see anymore I'll get it. Comments? 20:31, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and erase all the waste (by the tail and paws) <span style="">20:35 Tue Dec 6

Make the earpink a bit bigger on both ears. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:27, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't I not allowed to change things that weren't down for tweaking? 21:55, December 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Why wouldn't you change them? Might as well do it now; if it's not done now, it'll just have to be tweaked again later. 22:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry, I thought there was a rule or something, unless it was changed. Fixed earpink, shading, and waste. 20:34, December 7, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

You have to re-upload this over her kit image so it will work properly on the charart template. ;3 21:53, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. 20:12, December 8, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Brighten the eyes. 23:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste under the back paw. <span style="">23:48 Thu Dec 8

Sunstar (Alt. L) - Redone
OA was Sunspirit, then Echostar, and it needed to be less neon-orange and needed stripes. <span style="">02:36 Wed Dec 7

Darken the shading - 03:38, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">02:02 Thu Dec 8

Millie (W) - Redone
The consistency police are probably after me :(. I really am proud of this, even if it was really difficult. Original artist was Dawnfeather, and it needed to match the queen. 18:15, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that much different, actually. It's also really pretty! Lighten the stripe color so it's more of a gray. 18:20, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It IS really pretty! ^^ Lighten the base coat a tad too and blur the stripes. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  18:43, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the fans will lay off the page now that she has such a pretty picture. ;) Could you add just a bit more depth to her eye? 18:57, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so proud. ^-^ Changes are in the file history. 20:49, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, they're showing. 20:50, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit so they match the queen image and darken the shading. It looks really good ^^ <span style="">01:50 Thu Dec 8

Reuploaded 17:54, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe give her a collar, 'cause she had a collar in the magna, The Warrior's Return. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:02, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail (Q) - Redone
Okay, okay, before anyone gets upset, I get permission to redo it. She needed to match her warrior, and the image was just overall blotchy and...strange. OA was Icestorm123 or Insane. Comments for improvement? 04:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the black patch a lot smaller? It doesn't seem that large on the warrior image. The dapples need to be blurred as well to match. 20:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The only way I can make the black patch smaller is to bring it up a little and make the ginger patch on her shoulder a tad bit bigger, the fact that her belly is stretched and in her warrior, that part of her body is hidden/slightly contorted so I can't do too much with that. 23:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W)~ Redone
The shading and the stripes needed to be redone so i just redid the whole thing (There wasnt really much to keep the same anyway) and the OA was Rainwhisper. Comments? 06:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed typo, if that's okay :). Define the earpink. 17:56, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

He should have a scar on his flank, I think. 20:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. ^^ Lighten the shading just a tad, and give him green eyes. (he was mistakenly described with the once) Also, maybe make his base coat a bit darker and less saturated? It looks dark red instead of russet. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:57, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Millie (Lo) - Redone
Should I add a collar? Original artist was Mossleap, and it needed to match. 17:58, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, add a collar. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:00, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:07, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat a bit, thicken the collar in the front, thicken the lineart on the collar all around and blur the shading on the collar. Good job. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  20:54, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 22:10, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rockshade (W) - Redone
OA was Tawny, taken over by my dear friend Frostheart. Anyway, shading and stuff needed to be redone. I also refuse to give him a stumpy tail because he was a kit at the time. All kits have stumpy tails. 23:10, December 8, 2011 (UTC)