Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Nettlepaw (a) For approval
My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? -- ♥Shine star♥  19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar ♥Shine ]] star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

oh my star clan! i am soo annoyed! i can't find my nettlepaw file on my computer! -- ♥Shine star♥  21:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Did you try a search? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:33, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

ya -- ♥Shine star♥  17:56, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Can't you just copy and paste the image from here?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 18:10, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Uhh...you could just save the image to your computer again. (i think that's what Ashshadow meant.) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:16, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah it is sorry I wasn't clear.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:21, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I tried doing that but it comes out all blurry! -- ♥Shine star♥  15:58, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry but it sounds like you'll have to start over.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:14, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, I'm already trying, just give me a little while to get a new one -- ♥Shine star♥  15:12, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, heres my new nettlepaw, now he needs more work but at least i have something to work WITH. Comments? -- ♥Shine star♥  15:56, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the eye like on my tutorials, and add shading, if it's there I can't see it. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 16:51, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, i'll get on that soon, my big sis is on the desktop right now. and also, on this computer the tabby stripes look all bad, and icethroat, do you think i should redo my tabby stripes the way it says so on your tutorials, or the way it is already? and it sort of confuses me on the eye thing on your tutorials. -- ♥Shine star♥  00:19, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

please work on this or it will be declined--Echopaw 01:21, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw what are you talking about it was just updated.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:30, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

No, your stripes are fine! I'm not very good at those type of stripes, so I didn't bother making a tutorial for them, that's all. and the eye thing, each block is like a pixel, if that helps any. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:03, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Speckletail - For Approval


The pale tabby queen who became an elder. My second cat! Please comment.--Night shine 05:47, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty dang good. The only things I can see would be to blur the tabby markings some more, darken the shading, and darken the ear pink. Onther than that, you did well. ; ) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:26, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Mumble said it all! LOL! Yeah, all I see is the stuff that Mumble already mentioned! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Hopefully I made it better ^^--Night shine 23:32, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Your picture automatically updates, so you don't need to re-post. Just reupload it. As for the image, personally I think the ear pink is too purple. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 23:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the ear pink color--Night shine 01:04, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I think Darkhallows had Speckletail reserved first--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:36, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Night shine, Darkhallows reserved it first and you aren't a member.

Shady's time limit ran out. The two weeks she had to do the image have been used up. I say again;there is no such thing as reserved. Night shine is perfectly able to do this image. Night is a member; check the list. For the image, Night, you need to add more tabby stripes on the chest and on the haunch and blur them in more. Also add some lengthen the shading and blur it into the pelt some more. -- Tinsel claw  22:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Isn't Speckletail a pale brown tabby she-cat?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:24, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is pale brown tabby. -- Tinsel claw  22:28, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know, it looks cream colored to me--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:43, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

she looks great to me!!good tabby markings and shading!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  09:10, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's really cool.--:D Tinselbreeze ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:01, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on since the 14th, Night Shine. Please work on this or it will be declined as there are still outstanding comments for improvement. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:30, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry! I'm working on fixing it right now.--Night shine 15:32, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Night shine 05:10, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I really like this =) Just add some more stripes to the rest of the body and head etc, perhaps ake some of different lengths and sizes. Then run over them with the blur tool once or twice to blend slightly. (Also, remember to sign with ~ Sa  nd  y!

Re-uploaded-- Nightshine Happy Holidays! 00:59, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) - For approval


I was surprised no one had made/reserved him when I did... anyway, he's been gathering dust in my files while I've waited for Snowfur to be approved (she just was!!), so here he is. I think I might need to darken the stripes. Comments? Concerns? -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 01:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

His eyes are white, he may be blind, but Jayfeather does not have white eyes. Make them blue, please. Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 01:46, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink appears purplish and the tabby stripes are too blurred. Feel free to ignore the marking part. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!02:03, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather already has a Mc picture by Dawnfeather-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes are way to blurred. And the highlights on his face look like cobwebs, as do the ones on his legs. Blurr them some more please. And yes, Bracken's right about Dawnfeather's picture. I don't really know if it's been approved, you'll probably have to ask Bramble or Sandy--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:38, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well, Jayfeather is still an apprentice on his page, and he hasn't been reserved by anyone. So I would think that ment I could do him. My computer is sick, so I need to get on my mom's to fix those things. -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 11:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whilst Dawn's image was very good, it was never submitted for approval as far as I know and so has not been officially accepted by the project. This can stay up. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:04, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sandy. Anyway, I fixed the things you guys said. I had to save a new file because the changes weren't showing up. -- Snow star Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink looks kinda, lopsided. Try straightening it more, and make it a little darker. Jayfeather is a tabby, but he hardly has any stripes. Try making them thicker, and adding more. Google a gray tabby for reference. But this is much better than before =)--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:13, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added more stripes and fixed ear pink. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Okay...can you add shading to the shoulderish part? Do you see where I mean? Just dodge tool it and then blur and it looks good!-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  22:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and less bright, make it more salmon-ish. And blur it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:53, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed ear pink and shoulder. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:49, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

the earpink needs to be blurred more and maybe darken his tabby stripes a little. I can't really see the ones on his body.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:42, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg's shading needs to be blurred a little more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  20:07, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to darken the stripes without making them too dark. Blurred leg shading and earpink. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:40, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Make the earpink alittle smaller it takes up the whole ear.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:24, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Errr, it's supposed to. If you look at a cat's ear, the ear pink takes up the whole inside of the ear. It's not just like a big pink splotch. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 04:04, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

If you look at other approved images it dosent fill the whole ear so I think you should make it smaller.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 16:32, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Just make it slightly smaller so that it isn't touching the lineart. Also make it a more reddish colour - like Rippletail or Tornear's images. Go over the stripes once with the burn tool and run over them once with the blur tool. Perhaps add a small highlight to the herbs as well for a finishing touch. Look at Leafpool's Med Cat image as an example. Sa nd  y!  22:12, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 00:18, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Earpink is touching the line art. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!17:23, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? I didn't want to make it too small. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 18:56, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval


Heheh, she's so nice. :-) One of the images is about to be deleted, so it wont be 36 for long. Comments? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:29, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Agreed. Poor Minty! Anyway, onto the image, I think you need to blur the highlights a bit more, and maybe lighten the ear pink. But, otherwise, she looks awesome, Mumble! -- Angelstar Silver Bells 19:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! I'll get onto that ASAP. ;-) -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 19:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I think Nightfall101 had her already! i swear! but this is good Mumble!--Echopaw 21:15, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm... I know it says she's a queen on her page, but she isn't really. If she needed an image, she would be a loner. She had her kits as a loner, and the term queen is only used in Clans, just as kit-mother is used in the Tribe. Other loner/rogue she-cats who had kits aren't classified as queens, such as Sasha. It would be different if this was like Daisy, who had her kits and then joined a Clan, but Minty never joined or will join a Clan. So I don't think she should have a queen image, but a loner image instead. Please correct me if I'm wrong. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:41, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I see where you're coming from Bluestar but the definition of queen is any she-cat expecting or nursing kits. As for the image it's really good but I agree with Angelstar.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome Mumble! But I do agree with Bluestar. I think she should have a loner blank rather than a queen blank. Oh and Echo, yes, I did have her reserved for a while, but I had never done a loner before, and when I tried doing Minty, it didn't turn out so good. So, I decided to let someone else do her--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I discussed my view on this with Bluestar; you can see on her talk page. The bottom line is that this is the correct blank; she-cat nursing kits or pregnant is a queen, thus she be used with a queen blank. Tinsel claw  22:22, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

When I checked nobody had reserved her...? I'm gonna take a look at the discussion, and decide what to do about the blank, but I think I might stick with the queen; A queen is really just a pregnant or nursing she-cat. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:44, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Blurred her more, kept the blank the same. Anything else? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of dark, but that's just my opinion. Ignore me if you think the color is good. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 16:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. I'll lighten it up a tad, as well as the shading. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 16:25, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Sorry it took so long, I was busy. Lightened the ear pink, but left the shading alone. Anything else? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 22:51, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks nice.Lighten the shading a tad,please. '''FirePelt  01:22, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

kk. -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

UPLOADED. That's the best I could do. :P -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 18:21, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

It looks better!(Shading wise,everytihng else is perfect)You are a talented artist I have to tell you that!(^=._.=^) '''FirePelt 02:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! ^-^ -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 17:28, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's still too dark in places and I can't see the lineart - the base of her tail, her belly and some areas on her chest and shoulders. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:30, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Mumble, let me say i like you image, but this blank is for a clan queen. Minty is a loner/rough queen, but i'm not sure we need to do anything about it. -- ♥Shine star♥  00:45, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Shineh (can i call you that for now) it really dosn't matter BTW it's not rough its rouge don't worry every body gets it wrong! Echopaw 01:16, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) - For Approval
My first tabby. I did the best I could. I really want this approved by Christmas. Please! Comments before Christmas? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:28, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe more shading and some more stripes.-- Darkhallows 12:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink more, add more shading and blend, darken the tabby sttipes, and add more tabby stripes. Also, make them a little more wavy and not strait y's.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 17:55, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Wait I am too lazy to put the Reuploaded sign up. Wait I just did! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks messy. Blur it and add highlights to the head and tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Try adding some tabby stripes to the face, and make them less of a pattern of Ys but soe squggly lines, some Ys, and some little dashes in between the lines.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  20:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Um I don't get what your saying. Help? -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 21:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Icestorm, she means that the stripes are shaped liked 'Y's. Add a line in between some of them and make them smaller. Maplefern Hi!14:09, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whole image re-done. I also tried a diffrent style of shading. Any more comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:13, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I would probably blur the shading a little more, and make the stripes a little longer. Also, add some stripes to the legs. But other than that, it looks great!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:34, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Do I really have to? I was thinking of adding some lines and I kinda like it how it is now. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:43, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Which do you guys like better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:46, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I like the one on the right better. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:13, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

The one on the right is better. All I can say is tone down the ear pink a little bit, blend the corners of it, and maybe add a little more shading? Should be good to go, then. (: -- Quiet !... 08:15, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

So the one on teh right? Tell me if the changes didn't show up. Oh and Quietstep can you reply to my friend requst? Thanks! I don't think the changes showed up.--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 18:44, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

The right one although the ear pink needs blurring (which, if done right, should dull the colour a little too as it will mix in with the brown), the stripes look very blotchy and blurred. Perhaps make them a solid colour and more defined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:49, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Can you tell me how to fix them? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tell me if the changes didn't show. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:13, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading more but be careful not to hit the stripes. Also - the ear pink needs to be more like Swallowtail (RC) or Lionheart or Weaselfur Sa  nd  y!  22:52, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Which one do you like better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:57, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 02:39, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

To be honest, I liked the best, but out of these two, I like the stripes on the one on the right, but I like the color on the one on the left better. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 04:12, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat. Try darkening the second one, as well as blurring the ear pink and the general pelt. It looks pretty good. -- Bramble -sama  18:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Millie(Q)- For approval
-- ok since whitewing is approved i thought i'd put up Millie. she is my first tabby! and i am quite proud of her. comments? <font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

Looks good. The thing is, The stripes should be thinner --Rainstripe c: 16:33, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, discounting the 3 discussion sections this just fits nto 35 images. The stripes need to be less cartoony; look at some aproved tabbies for reference. There are a few different styles you can try. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ears are too dark and need blurring. Sandy's right. The tabby markings are too thick, and could do with more blurring. --Birchy (I don't know how to get a signature!!)

The tabby stripes need to look more like Millie's stripes on her warrior image. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, the ear pink needs blurred, and fix the color; make it more like the color in Millie's warrior image. You don't need ear pink on the ear farthest from us (the left ear), so get rid of that. You need to make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image, and then blur the stripes. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 15:38, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image,please.Blur the ear pink,fix color,like her warrior image.Delete the farthest ear pink,it's not needed.I can see your proud to,everyone is for there first's of anything!-- '''FirePelt  02:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

ok with these comments i will redo her completely. she should be reuploaded in around 2 days,<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

This needs to be worked on or it will have to be declined. Also, please sign with ~ so the timestamp will be displayed. Thanks Sa  nd  y!  14:14, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploadedeven more proud!--<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!  17:43, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Shellheart(D)-For approval
My first official Char art. I like the way he turned out. Pretty Pretty c: Ready for approval! Comments? --Rainstripe c: 17:17, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

is it me or do i see a gray blurr on its chest ~iceyfang

Looks good! I would blur the shading, though, and the eyes need to have a glare and pupil. See Icethroat's tutorials for info on how to do the eye. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 18:08, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Bluestar1776.Blur the shading.I did the eye for you.(sorry if you get mad,I wanted to help you!) '''FirePelt 18:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt, you need to give users a chance to improve for themselves; this is Rainstripe's first charart afterall. Rainstripe and Iceyfang, please sign with ~. As for the image, it needs ear pink. Take a look at some tutorials for how to do this if you are stuck. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:38, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded with ear pink and more blur. --Rainstripe c: 18:55, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good, Ranstripe:D But, the ear pink should only be on one ear (the one that is on the side of the head that is facing us). --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 19:09, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded fixed ear pink. Ready for approval!!--Rainstripe c: 19:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

i still see gray on his chest Iceyfang 19:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Its shading. Durr --Rainstripe c: 19:31, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

No, I think I see it too, a paler grey - the shading should reach the lineart. Also, the ear pink needs to be smaller and a more rosy/salmon colour. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:34, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded. Fixed

Please remember to sign all of your posts with the four tildes(~). I see a shadow behind him. It shouldn't be there.-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 21:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded P: --Rainstripe c: 22:46, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

His back looks faded and that gray patch is still on the front of him.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:48, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Whole image redone. --Rainstripe c: 23:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

the eyes seem yo be life less can give the eyes a puil Iceyfang 23:59, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Check Icethroat21's tutorial for eye diagrams. The spots look. . . circular. Make them more uneven and natural, like on Brambleberry. The ear pink is way too large. Make it smaller and darker and blur it.-- :) Jingletalon I've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas |undefined 15:44, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Raineh 20:20, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

i think theres some gray in the open spots or it might be me Iceyfang 22:23, December 23, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

I see it too. Fix that and I think he'll be ready.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:13, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I dont understand. Mabie could you explain it more? --Raineh 13:44, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The space between his front and back legs is light gray. It needs to be transparent or atleast white.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 16:28, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Fallowtail- For Approval
It's one of my first chararts and I'll be willing to take any comments on it. --Echoheart 12:12, December 21, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

Their are highlights above her paw, I don't know if their suppose to be their if so blur them if not get rid of them. Darken the ear pink and maybe thicken the shading. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 12:56, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading near her belly. Maplefern Hi!13:06, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

It looks pixelated, and this is because you saved it on a jpg file. Unfortunately, you have to redo it and then save it on a png file. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 15:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think you have to redo it now. Just run the sharpen tool over it once or twice and save it as png.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:46, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be me being picky, but I don't really think the color is quite right. Her description says "light brown" this is like, golden-yellow.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Echoheart 12:28, December 23, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

Warrior, the sharpen tool makes it look more pixelated, not less.. Right now the image is already pixelated a bit, and its still a jpg. The background needs to be transparent, and it should be a png or even a gif to keep the transparency and quality. Unfortunately, I think you might need to redo this to do that though, like Hawk said earlier... -- Quiet !... 21:03, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. -- Bramble -sama  18:51, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Stonestar(L) - For Approval
I TRIPLE-CHECKEDthis time. So I do NOT think anyone else has done this. If they have, I will wallow in shame. Much shame. Anyway, here is a charart of Stonestar. Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 00:33, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful charart. And No, It hasn't been done/reserved. Try shading the outside of the Hing leg. Maplefern Hi! 00:52, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

This is lovely Wolfie. (I'm going to start calling you that. :P) Just blur the shading a bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:29, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Okey dokey; i will when I get home. I'm at school right now. And I did put shading on the hindleg, but I guess it's too teeny to be seen. I'll fix it, as well as blurring the shading. --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 15:50, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 17:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I can see you've used the smudge tool. You need to blur! =) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas!  18:13, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I did blur. I blurred before i used the smudge. then i smudged. then I uploaded, and you guys told me to blur it more. So i did. and now i have to blur more, but i can't because it's fully blurred. --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 01:56, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

You shouldn't smudge just blur. Thats where the problem came from. Maybe you should redo the shading if its already blurred to the max -- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 02:00, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 20:32, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Shading needs more blur c:--Raineh 18:44, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Dapplenose (E) - For Approvel
...Haven't done of these in three months, so don't be too hard. It's horrible, I know. By the way, my birthday's tomorrow! Yay me. ^^--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:59, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Happpy birthday! Anyway, the whisker is blurred. Maplefern

Add ear pink --Icecloud33 01:52, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Good, but Dapplenose is mottled. She looks more like solid gray in this picture--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:38, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Weird. It looks are blurry but it isn't on my computer. O.o I'll go fix it. -.-;--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 16:20, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Her front paws don't seem to have shading on them. -- Quiet !... 21:10, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Put shading on her front paws,and put ear pink on her. '''FirePelt 21:56, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Needs ear pink.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 19:16, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this, or it will have to be declined--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:38, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

It's only been 5 days Nightfall. Sa nd  y!  22:53, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. The little calender on my laptop is broken--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:07, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Gorsetail (NP Warrior)-for approval
Here's Gorsetail...I'm pretty sure nobody's reserved him...so..how is he?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 18:40, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! --Raineh 00:13, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Very good job! Just darken the ear pink a little, so we can see it, and blur some of the highlights.--<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:16, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

reupladed -- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 19:17, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and then it should be ready. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:53, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

And try to make the ear pink not touch the lineart.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 20:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again I don't think it was ever touching the lineart(does it looks like it is?)-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 03:55, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks like it is, actually. Also, it still needs to be more of a reddish color. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 00:12, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Leafpool- For Approval
my second charart...comments??-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  10:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
 * it needs more shading, all the tail is a good thing to do and the ear with out the earpink on it can have shading on it to, other then that for now I can't see any thing else. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:34, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


 * Is this charart leafpool? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This doesn't look much like her Medicine cat version Icecloud33 13:41, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Try to smudge and blur the tabby markings to make them look more natural. Otherwise, it's good! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 17:55, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Try to make it more of a sandy brown, as she probally got her fur color from Sandstorm. Make the chest white go up to her face, like in Leafpool's medicine cat image. The eyes also seem to be going off the lineart a bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 20:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  08:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the color is much better. But I still have a few things

1. The stripes on her back need to be connected to her back in some way

2. The stripes need to be blurred more

3. The white on her chest is still way to big

4. The white on her chest needs to stretch up to her face

5. The white on her paws should be smudged into her pelt and then blurred

Here's something you should do. Save Leafpool's approved medicine cat image, and then bring it up in your art program along with your image. That way you can make it as close as possible--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  12:05, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The pelt doesn't match Leafpool's medicine cat image. And the eye is freaking me out. Try looking at Stoneclaw on how to do the eye. Also she needs ear-pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:09, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:08, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Make it more like this:And the eplt dosent look like her medicine cat version. . '''FirePelt 16:09, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, it's getting better. But the color still isn't quite right. Try running the dogde tool over the entire image a couple of times, that ought to help. And the stripes are getting better too, but they look kinda sloppy--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I'd like to note that the thumb near the bottom is from Fire, not Ivy. :x -- Quiet !...  04:26, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I saved her medicine cat pic on my computer and erased the herbs,and I tried to put her chin on.You can tell.I put it on to show her what the pelt color is,where the white comes,and the tabby strpes. '''FirePelt 20:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

i'm proud of this one for sure!!!reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:43, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Her tabby stripes are too dark, sorry.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 18:06, December 29, 2009 (UTC)


 * The tabby markings are darker than the ones on the medicine cat image. The ear pinks are different too. Blend in the area where the white fur touches her tabby fur. Plus add some shading.<span style="font-family:Segoe Script; background:navy; color:silver; border: 2px dashed silver; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: silver">Shimmerpool 2010 on its way! :D

this is better reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:24, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be blurred. And the tabby markings look a little dark -- '''Icecloud33 16:10, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Her eye looks a little squished to me.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  19:05, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

i used color dropper.reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The color of the stripes is better, but they need to be blurred into the pelt. And also, Moss is right about the eye. Look on one of Icethroat's tutorials for help on the eye--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:44, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

thanks!! reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:01, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Crag where eagles nest(CG)-For Approval


This is my first ever cave guard.I'm not shure about the mud streaks though.Comments?Critque?Questions?Help? '''FirePelt 05:06, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

You need to color the space between his legs and right now he looks kind of black. Lighten him a little. As for the mud, it looks kinda shiney(cant think of a better word)-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 15:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on it as soon as I come back from shopping,prob wont be able to work on it till about,4 o' clock,eastern standered time. '''FirePelt 18:53, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Also, darken the ear pink. -- Pan dast orm <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda Love 19:43, December 24, 2009 (UTC)Icestorm!

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt 02:10, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Add somemore shading, and blur the brown streaks.-- Darkhallows 15:07, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt 15:38, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the earpink,shading, and mud some more. This is very good.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:08, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs to be thicker and blurred more as I can barely see it. Sa nd  y!  22:18, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else at all? '''FirePelt 23:51, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Make the earpink more salmony. Maplefern 22:09, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else at all? '''FirePelt 22:35, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Earpink is to light but the nose is good. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!14:58, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.anything else?I fixed the ear pink.Anything else at all? '''FirePelt 15:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Molepelt (MC) For Approval
Did I go over the image limit? If I did, feel free to remove. I just did this for fun. Still waiting for comments on Ryewhisker. Anyways how is he? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:58, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Neat! I really like it. Maybe make the medicine stuff in his mouth a darker green, so it looks more natural. Otherwise, it's awesome! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 23:15, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I love it Icy! But I think you should probably blur the shading and highlights some, especially around the neck. But it's awesome!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:32, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

His ear pink seems to be a bit too bright - the shade is right, its just light. Highlights would make it seem like there's more shading, and the herbs would look better if all three were different shades(don't forget to shade them, too!). -- Quiet !... 08:08, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I had actually reserved him, but you keep this up; I still haven't got around to doing him anyways, haha. Also, merry Christmas! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:07, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

This is awsome! Darken and blur earpink and it should be good! Merry Christmas! 18:23, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with maple,darken and blur the ear pink. '''FirePelt 14:28, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Okay for some reason I can't get to pixlr.com. I'll try to get to this as soon as I can. Please don't decline! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Pouncetail (E) - For Approval
I know this is over the image limit, but there's a whole bunch that are in the 24-hour stage, so I think I'm safe. Anyway, merry Christmas everybody:D I got a tablet today, too:D --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 00:27, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good just maybe make the earpink a bit darker.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:32, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Ashshadow:) I darkened the ear pink. Better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 00:44, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Yup, I think so.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:47, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

This is great =) Blur the edges of the shading though as there is a distinct line between the shading and white of the pelt. Sa  nd  y!  22:23, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm so sorry for my inactivity lately! Somehow, a virus had worked its way into the computer and kept me from getting on the internet. And now my new tablet isn't working. We think the virus is gone now, but we can't be sure, so my dad has to send the computer off to one of his friends to fix it completely (so I won't be on even more soon D:). And so much has happened since I've been gone! Anyway, is this better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 22:29, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (W) - For Approval
I know this is over the image limit, but there are some images on the 24 hours already. My first tortoiseshell, Spottedpelt. I did my best to make her look like Spottedleaf, but I epically failed. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 01:26, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

You did not fail! This is great! Hold on let me get a good look at it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:46, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, darken ear pink and make it smaller. Are the white spots completly white? If not make them a very very very light gray. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:48, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

This looks fantastic! I agree with Icestorm, though, the white parts of the fur need some shading. They don't have to be completely really light gray, you can put the burn tool on highlights instead of midtones and put it at about 10-14 percent and shade like you normally would. Also, make the ear pink more of a reddish color. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:33, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Uploaded I've darkened the white parts and made the ear pink reddish. Anything else? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 00:06, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink just a little bit darker, and then it should be good. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:26, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Dovepaw-For Approval
Since Kestrelflight was approved, I'm posting her. Anyway, I should apologise to Sandy (Sorry!). So here is Dovepaw. Second charart. Comments? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 17:37, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Add ear-pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:42, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, don't worry about it =) Yes, add ear pink and darken the shading. Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas!  17:43, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Yes what Sandy said. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:45, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 17:48, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:50, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

i think it's too bright now.... Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 17:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 18:02, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 20:54, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

It looks. . . teal. Run the desaturate tool over it a few times.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 20:54, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 21:02, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 14:24, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Add neck shading. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 06:10, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!13:05, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Make it darker, the same color as the rest of the shading. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 17:58, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 18:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I still can't see the neck shading. For an example, look at Thistlepaw (WC). Try making the neck shading thicker. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 19:29, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 19:33, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 21:39, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks unnatural. Blur it.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 16:56, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur the shading around the whiskers without bluring the whiskers. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!00:00, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Snaketail(E)- For Approval
I tried to make him look like his warrior image. Comments?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:44, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Otherwise, it looks great. Unless there is something I've missed... Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 18:04, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 16:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

hmm... hate to say it, but in all honesty, I think you did make it worse. It looked more blurred before. Sa nd  y!  19:32, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedOk I think I fixed it.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 19:46, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble -sama  18:52, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Pebblefoot-For Approval
Here is Pebblefoot! Third Charart. It said that once you had one image approved, you could put up two. Correct me if I'm wrong. And I hope this isn't over 35. Anyway, comments? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!19:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The texture is great =) Just thicken and blur the shading, and blur the highlight on the face. Sa  nd  y!  22:24, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 22:46, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 23:22, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken all of the shading some more, and add some more to the tail. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:30, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maplefern 02:37, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!16:07, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Anything? Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!01:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

He looks very bumpy. I know he's supposed to be mottled, but still. And most of the shading on the front legs and along the back, isn't even touching the lineart--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:48, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!00:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is a little better, but it still looks really bumpy to me. And the shading a long the tail looks very unnatural. Make the shading run along the lineart all the way up to the tip of the tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:17, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Lionheart (D) - For Approval


Stormfur was just approved, so here's Lionheart. Fourth charart, second tabby, first deputy. I tried to make him as much like his warrior version as possible. Comments?

Side note: Everything, excluding the the front leg and tail, are made by Dawnfeather. I claim no credit to any of that. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 22:38, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look to brown. Make them more golden.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:11, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I just ran the dodge tool over all of it. Better? -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 23:20, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Make it look more like his warrior version:it looks nothing like it(stripes) and neither does the color. '''FirePelt 23:31, December 27, 2009 (UTC)



or the eyes Iceyfang 01:02, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Acually, the eye is fine. (I would make it a little brighter green, but you don't have to worry about that right now. Let's focus on his pelt first) If you look at his warrior and apprentice images on his article Iceyfang, you'll see that his eyes are green--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:04, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Iceyfang, I didn't make his warrior image, so I can't make an exact replica. I used the color dropper on the pelt, so it's the same color. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 01:45, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I think that when you used the color dropper you took color from where the shadind is because he isnt the same color this one is darker.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:52, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

And his eyes aren't green. I think that's what Iceyfang was trying to tell you.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 16:21, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

His eyes have been mentioned as being green and Bramble said it was okay on his apprentice pic so I think it's okay green.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 16:30, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

This is nowhere close to his warrior image, Bluestar. I know it's a different style to yours, but you have to try your best to replicate it as it's the image that was done first. That's what happens when you do a different rank for another charart. -- Bramble -sama  16:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I've got a crazy idea here. I'm going to save the Lionheart warrior image, bring it up it paint, then get the deputy blank, make the white transparent, paste the blank over the image, and the fix the spots like the tail and leg that wouldn't be colored. Should be done in about 10 minutes. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 17:01, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I know the tail and front leg look wierd, I'll fix it soon. What do you guys think? -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 17:53, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Really cool! But you're right about the leg and tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 17:57, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There, fixed leg and tail. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 18:36, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Is it just my computer or is there a shadow at the bottom. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 18:45, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

It's not just your computer, there's a shadow under the tail. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 19:25, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Whoa, hang on a minute! I'm not sure you can just use the paint job from the warrior image. You can copy it and use it to help, but you can't just paste the new blank over it... (Bramble?) Also, the lineart looks strange and square as if it's been altered. Sa nd  y!  21:04, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Hang on Sandy. I may be completely wrong about this, but I was looking over the approved charart archives the other day. I found Tigerstar's image, it was either his warrior image or his deputy image. I don't remember who made it though. But the user who made it, said that he/she copied the stripes from his warrior/deputy image, and pasted them onto his/her image.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:07, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Well, you're right of course - I checked it out and yes, Dawn did copy the stripes from the warrior image onto the deputy image, but the difference being she made both images... I'm gonna sit out on this one and let Bramble decide. Sa nd  y!  21:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't realize she had made both images--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:40, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Bramble and other leaders have stressed numerous times that you can not just copy one image and use it for another with minor variations. I'll wait for Bramble to decide, but I'm pretty certain that's the rule. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, an issue. I have to go in about two minutes, but I'll post a response as soon as I have time to get back on. Just pause this section for a little bit. :) Bramble  -sama  22:15, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, if it's going to be an issue, I'll just step down and let somebody who can make that style of tabby stripes do it. I thought my first one was pretty good, but oh well. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:31, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Wait a minute. I was looking at Tigerstar's page, and his warrior and deputy image have the exact same stripes. Just like these do. If his was fine, why isn't this one's? -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:34, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Just wait for Bramble to decide.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 16:59, December 29, 2009 (UTC)


 * See above as to why the Tigerstar stripes are not an issue. Bramble has said she will address this issue and she will. There's no point you withdrawing -you'll be able to make similar stripes, you just need to spend some time on them. Sa  nd  y!  17:40, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

I just read the section below; thanks so much. I'll fix the shadow soon. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 15:58, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Robinwing (WC)-For Approval
Okay, here's Robinwing of WindClan! Man, why are there so many Robinwings? There's been one in every single clan. Even SkyClan! What's wrong with, Robinflight, or Robinsong? Huh, anyway. How do you like her?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:44, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

I like her.I think its a nice image.Maybe darken the shading on the head by like,3 and a half percent. '''FirePelt 03:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

There hasn't been one in ShadowClan yet! (Not that I know of, anyway.) I wrote a fanfic about there being too many Robinwings, actually. But anyway, for the image, blur all of the shading on the back just a little bit more. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 06:07, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I saved it as two files because I didn't really like how the shading on the head turned out. I've never ever done shading on the face before, so I wanted to see which image you guys like better.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:11, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

They both look really good, and I can barely see the difference. They both look fine, you can just choose which one you keep up for approval. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 17:11, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I decided to keep the first image. I didn't like the shading on the second one--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:59, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble -sama  22:07, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Rain that Rattles on Stones (E) For Approval
Okay, this was hard to do. I've never done an elder with a muzzle "turned white from age". And I was planning on making the only visible eye like, closed, to indicate that it was missing. But I shied away from the idea after I started the image, and just made the eye blue. I'm probably gonna wait till I have more expeirence to do something like that. Okay well, here he is, Rain that Rattles on Stones!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:28, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Bllur the shading on the tail. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare!01:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The muzzle looks like it is a feature of the pelt, not "turned gray from age." Blur it more, or remove it and instead add a paler shade of gray, and highlight it a lot.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  17:33, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the tail as much as I could, and is the muzzle any better? I tried smudging it a little, and then blurred it, then I added a few highlights--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:15, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The only thing I see is the muzzle; if it's gray with age, it should have the lightest white tinge next to the lineart and blurred a little inward. Right now it loks like his he just has a white muzzle. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not excatly sure I know what you mean Moss. If I tinged it white even more, wouldn't that make it look even more like just a white muzzle?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:49, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Clawface (R) For Approval
I've been pretty busy for a while, and I just remembered that I have this image that I've been waiting to put on here after the number died down. So here ya go!--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:05, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is WAY to dark.Also,make the ear pink smaller and blur,blur,blur!The line art on one of the legs seems fuzzy. '''FirePelt 03:48, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Firepelt, you tell her to blur more.. Then say that the lineart is already blurred? That's not too helpful. :\ Anywho, back to the image. The shading isn't all that bad, just blur it in more and it should thin out(make it lighter/more blended). The ear pink should be a bit smaller, fix that by using a brush tool or the eraser(depending on whether or not you put it on a new layer). Also, the lineart on parts of the legs did get blurred. Also, though it might just be me, it seems as though you forgot to color his eye? -- Quiet !...  04:22, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

No,I mean try to Blur the shading.Not the lineart.She needs to FIX the lineart. '''FirePelt 04:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I never said to blur the lineart.. -- Quiet !...  04:30, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

No,I meant the Lineart LOOKS blurred.I said htat. '''FirePelt 04:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Whatever you said.....which leg?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The back front leg. '''FirePelt 15:45, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Timberfur(D)- For Approval
Well, no one had him reserved or anything. . . so. . . here he is! Comments?-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 16:46, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color like Rippletail, and blur the midriff shading. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 17:13, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did my best-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 17:59, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...try lightening the midriff shading just a little bit so it doesn't look so dark. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 03:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?-- :) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! |undefined 18:07, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Q)-For Approval
So...both Chirp and Foxleap were approved and I've been waiting for a while to put this up so here she is! She's my first two-color cat that I made really fast...please comment and criticize, I need something to do :P -- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  17:38, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

P.S. This is the 36th discussion...but one image is being disclined...so yeah...-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  17:39, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Good job! Blur the white on the chest a little. It looks spiky... -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 17:55, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful! Remove the earpink from the farthest ear, as there is no need to have it there. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 18:20, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I love this Mossy, but the thing is I already told Blackclaw that we should save the ancient queens for the kit-mother blanks, as the ancients eventually turn into the Tribe and we were going to use separate blanks for kit-mothers. It'd be like the to-bes being used for the 'soft paws', and it would save using the kit-mother blanks only twice. I'm open on suggestions on this though; if you really want to use the queen blanks, then I can compromise. Bramble -sama  21:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Oh...darn...yeah I didn't know about that...and are the kit-mother blanks approved yet? If not, I'd prefer just to keep this one, I need something to do :) but it didn't take long so I could redo it on another blank. I just don't want to be waiting forever for a blank to be approved to do this pic again.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  00:28, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry about it, Mossy. Icethroat had an idea that we could put mud streaks on the queen blanks to show kit-mothers, so we won't have to make an extra pair of blanks. Now, for the image, the white looks a little too pure and bright; make it a touch more dark, but not so that it looks too gray. -- Bramble -sama  00:40, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Got rid of unnecesary earpink, blurred, made white less bright. I didn't add mud streaks in case the idea wasn't officalized.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  18:54, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Mud streaks aren't necessary anyway; this is an ancient queen, not a kit-mother. Comments before approval? -- Bramble -sama  19:07, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Kittypet Blank - For Approval
Here's a kittypet blank. Any crits? --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 20:42, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Well, two things

1. This is above the image limit (But since there are a couple of images in the 24 hour stage, I don't think that's a problem)

2. There has to be more blanks. Two short haired males and Two short haired females; Two long haired males and two long haired females--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:16, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I guess this means we're taking blanks again? Anywho, the lineart should be thicker, like the rest of the blanks, in addition to what Nightfall said. -- Quiet !...  21:53, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yes we are Quiet - see the purple message =) Sa  nd  y!  21:56, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with quiet and night.You need 2 female,(l&s)and 2 males (l&s).Also,the lineart needs to be thicker.

FirePelt, you forgot to sign. As for the blank, thicken the lineart. Confettifern And a happy Leaf-bare! 22:06, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Im so Forgetful!XD.Thanks! '''FirePelt 22:09, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The rear doesn't look realistic, and it doesn't look slightly similar to the other blanks.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 23:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

its good, but the eye is kinda big,and we need male short,fmaleshort,mlong,fmlong.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:45, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Well, this is good for a first effort, but it looks way to cartoony. You need to make it more realistic.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (W) - For Approval
I know this doesn't look very good. I didn't save before making this patched, and then I remembered, that his apprentice image wasn't patched. So then I had to do a ton of blurring, and it still doesn't look quite like his apprentice version...Comments and suggestions? -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 23:11, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

uh...i thought i was doing it..-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:28, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Ivy(if its ok I call you that) it was checked and Icethroat had him on her current projects first. As for the image I like it alot,but maybe blur the earpink a tad-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:31, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

oops-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 04:10, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Darken ear pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 01:57, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:44, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Blanks - For Approval


'''((Well, I figured because there are a few images on 24 hours that this would be alright to post.. If not, please decline/withdraw/whatever this!))''' I've been waiting a while to try doing a blank set, and I finally got my chance. (: I tried to make it so there are no odd pixels(ones you'd miss with the fill tool). What do you guys see that needs to be fixed/changed? -- Quiet !...  00:09, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

I like them,but the mouth seems,odd to me.Here,I'll add a pic of when I saved this for a tester cat.I did'nt want to get all into detail,but I wanted to see how it would fill in,and how the shading would look.I think they look ok.I'll check them over some more. '''FirePelt 00:20, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, only the left ear should need pink. The right ear is facing the side, but both can have pink, I guess. As for the mouth, how does it seem odd to you? I might be able to fix it. -- Quiet !...  00:38, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

These look pretty good, but the tuft of hair, make it just a straight line (well, curved along the head line, but not with the extra fur) on the shorthairs, kind of like on the cave-guard blanks where the tuft of fur is only on the longhairs. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 01:05, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

They seem a little too chubby for a sharpclaw. They look more like kittypet blanks to me (not a bad thing, though, seeing as we need those).--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded the short haired blanks. Shaf, its probably because their belly isn't visible at all. Its hidden behind their hip and front leg. -- Quiet !...  01:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be me and not matter but it's hard to put tabby stripes on these. Again I dont think they're any tabby sharpclaws.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:12, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

'''Reuploading right now because I forgot their whiskers.. >.< -- Quiet''' !...  06:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Three tabbys in the ancients: Stone song, Furled Bracken and Jay's wing.

this is Beutiful! --Echopaw 14:27, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, Quiet! Just make the ears a bit smaller, and the chest on the longhairs kind of look wierd... -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:35, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I made an example for the shorthaired blank. If you color the nose black, it looks strange. I also used a different style for the eyes.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 17:34, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow, the lineart is really smooth. Do you have a tablet?

Anyways, the only things are that the eyes and mouth look slightly twisted, the shoulder should be brought in a bit, and there's a thick black spot. I made you a diagram to help explain.



Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:39, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I understand the shoulder, but why the jaw and eyes? Their heads are tilted slightly, and putting their jaw and eyes completely straight up would be awkward. :\ As for the thick spot, I'll see what I can do.. -- Quiet !...  01:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, I didn't relize that their heads were turned. *Fail* Nevermind. Oh, also shorten the wiskers on the right side a bit. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 01:29, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

This are so awsome Quiet! But, they look soooo cudly! A little too cudly for Sharpclaw blanks however. If you put a collar on these, they'd make PERFECT Kittypet blanks! Oh well. But for the blanks themselves, I think the eyes might be a little bit difficult to do. I mean, I don't know since I haven't colored one yet. But they look a little big. Maybe make the eyes a little more like the ones on the Cave Guard blanks?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:11, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Husker (Lo) For Approval
Here he is again. So, Comments? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 19:42, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and darken ear pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:50, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Do you mean the shading on his back? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 20:36, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedHow's this? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 20:40, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

No all the shading. The ear pink needs to be smaller and darker,. (I know I'm a pain) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:44, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

The back is still to dark. Maplefern 21:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded is this better? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 17:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

On his description on his page,it says he has a hay colored tuft of fur on his head,there is no hay colored tuft of fur on this chararts head. '''FirePelt 22:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt, this was explained to me before, the mangas are gray, so we can't be sure that the tuft of fur on his head is hay-colored. Also some people make up fake descriptions for cats. If you want to see what Bramble said about that, check the Declined Section, for when it was temporarily declined. That said, do you see anything else wrong with the charart? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 01:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Bumblepaw (Ki) for Approval
Happy to finally be back on here ^_^ Well I saw the news post and decided to get back to an old image I had from before. I used his apprentice image for reference so his colors would be the exact same. Comments :) ?-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 22:21, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This looks awesome! I think I see a little bit of blurred lineart around the paws, though. Also, the shading on the chest could be blurred a little bit more. Otherwise, great job! -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 22:25, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Updated--<span style="font-family:Segoe Script; background:navy; color:silver; border: 2px dashed silver; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: silver">Shimmerpool 2010 on its way! :D

This is awesome but...aren't we supposed to do current ranks only?-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  18:56, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Mossy, look at the purple message up top that says "Important!" and it now says that we can do non-current ranks again, so this is fine. Shim (Can I call you that?), this looks awesome. Comments before approval? -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 19:40, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I think the ear pink should be blurred a bit more. And welcome back Shimmer:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 22:39, December 30, 2009 (UTC)


 * Updated and thx ^_^--<span style="font-family:Segoe Script; background:navy; color:silver; border: 2px dashed silver; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: silver">Shimmerpool  2010 on its way! :D

Pebbleheart -for Approval
2nd Charart first tabby. What do you think--Icecloud33 01:28, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good, but the stripes are awful thick. Thin them down a bit and make them less like straight triangles; swiggle them a little. Also, add some more shading on the legs and paws. -- Bramble -sama  18:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Is the stripe on the tail too thick -- '''Icecloud33 00:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Petalfur (W) - For Approval
I'm not sure what to think of this one, I think I got the shading on the white fur too dark, but I'm not sure...comments and suggestions? -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:33, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Yes the shading on the white fur is a little dark--Icecloud33 13:20, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did I lighten it enough? -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 16:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

This looks better -- '''Icecloud33 00:44, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Owlclaw (W)- For Approval
I know, over the limit, but there are images up for approval, including mine, so. . . comments? -- :) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! |undefined 03:03, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks great. I can't see anything that needs to be fixed at the moment. -- Bramble -sama  18:54, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and I think he'll be good to go. :) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else?-- :) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! |undefined 00:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) - For Approval
I've got Rock ready as well, but since there are quite some images up, with some in the 24 hour stage, I thought that it would be all right. If it isn't decline/withdraw/whatever this. I don't think I got the scars quite right. I tried to do it looking at the medicine cat version. G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 06:35, December 30, 2009 (UTC)


 * Well done with jag :) as for the scars I would try and make them go all the way to the line art (like in the warrior charart) but not the one over the eye. The ear pink is red thats right for a black cat, but on her other charart it's pink, I'm not saying you should make this one pink as well but it's something to think of and maybe make this one have pink or the other one have red. and don't forgot that we are trying to make so all the pages have a charart not just one having lots, but seeing you have made this I think it would be good to get it approved, but them try and find pages with no charart. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:53, December 30, 2009 (UTC)


 * My mistake. I intended to say that I tried to do it by looking at the medicine cat version. btw, the eye is orange. G r  a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 12:23, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, Brambleclaw, if you look at the purple message, we are now allowed to do non-current ranks. As for the image, just blur the highlights. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 15:24, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see the eye all that well. Maybe pick a lighter orange for it? The one you picked it pretty dark. -- Quiet !...  21:48, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Minnowtail(Ki) -For Approval
i like her so i did her.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC) She looks cross eyed to me.Go to Icethroats tutorials to see how to do the kit eye.As for the charart itself,Maybe darken the shading just a tad,and to me,the ear pink looks weird,like ones like a fat line and the other is good. '''FirePelt 17:27, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I don't think we're supposed to do non-current blanks any more. See the purple notice at the top of the page--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:57, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall, no one said anything about this not being a current image? All the message is saying is that we can do any rank for any cat now(so long as we have the blanks to do so), and that blanks are allowed again. -- Quiet !...  21:44, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot Minnowtail was a kit in the NP series. Sorry Ivy! Oh and Quite, what I meant to type was non-current images. Sorry about the confusion!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:55, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

reuploadedyeah,her dyd was a bit creepy..-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:48, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, that looks a lot better. But doesn't Minnowtail have amber eyes, not yellow? If so, you might want to change their color.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:51, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

it says she have sharp amber eyes,and sharp amber eyes are yellowish.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:03, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Rainstorm (W)-For Approval
(Yes this image is #36.) However, I saw my image for Rising Moon ready for approval and (yes it's me again) I put him up!!! My first mottled cat...Comments?-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  19:11, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He seems a bit dark. Maybe lighten him up a little? -- Quiet !...  21:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Berrynose(KI)-For Approval


This is my 2nd Kit.It was gathering dust in my files,and finally we are allowed to do non-current ranks.I know im the 2nd image over the limit,but I think there 4 images ready to be approved.Critque?Comments?questions?help? '''FirePelt  22:32, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

blur shading and your NOT over page limit very good!--Echopaw 01:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) for approvel
well some how would not upload blueh's one she fixed for me so heres the original ~echopaw--Echopaw 01:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Blackclaw (E) - For Approval
Since there are a few images that are being approved/declined, I decided it was okay to post Blackclaw as an elder. Comments/Criticism? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 01:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

dodge the middle,cause i chan't see the shading now.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:04, December 31, 2009 (UTC)