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Clawface (W) ~ Tweaked


Orginal artist was Snadstar12. Well, here he is....all I did was add some scars....I tred to make them match is rouge image. Idk if i did or not...but...comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:26, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Please fix the eye? 14:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar near the haunch looks too light at the bottom. 21:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

That is because i can't blur that part without blurring the lineart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just fix it afterwards or read a tutorial 22:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll move the scar over a bit...then I'll upload. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Moved the scar over, blurred the shading, and fixed the eye. What else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I've uploaded over to see if i could ger the changes to show. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-do the shading. 00:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks fine to me, just needs to be blured a bit. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  04:46, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did the shading and the highlights(Well, I brightened them a tad.) And blurred it to the max. Changes should be in the history. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:49, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make it look like the rogue image? ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, could you make the ends of the scars a bit pointier? With rounded ends, they kind of look like brush strokes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:54, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, I'll do it late, 'cause, Gimp isn't opening Clawface for some reason, nor is Pixril, so I'll see if I can work on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Gimp is working now, I'll get right on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-changes aren't showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy; fix that, and blur the shading more. 22:36, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Omg, the changes ARE showing! What are the odds? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark and blotchy. You'll have to redo it unless you find another way to make it work. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar on the tail wouldn't go like that, it can only be where there is flesh. If his rouge is like that, the scar needs to be tweaked. 02:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

So the tail isn't flesh?.....it is just fur mussle and bone? I'm confused..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

You know how the tail bone goes down the mmiddle? There can't be a scar extending across the whole thing because apart from down the middle, the rest is fur. Sky, it's over 9000!! 03:21, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, his rogue charart's tail scar is right next to the middle, so it's a bad choice for a scar location, but it's ok. However, this one is scooted up some. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:24, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are blotchy, blur them. 21:56, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so do I remove the tail scar? Or what? 'Cause, I'm confused.

Sorry, that was me. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:06, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think you should redo the tail, and put the scar a little lower. 22:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading - make it more like his rogue. 14:36, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudstar (L) - Tweaked
Alright, here's Cloudstar. He needed darker shading, and I changed the earpink beacuse it was purply. Original artist was Sandy. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  15:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 15:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading needs to be blurred, and the haunch shading is blotchy, so fix that. 22:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  14:18, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There seems to be some lineart or something that's leaked into the <--- ear. It's darker then the rest of the area around it. 23:34, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It was some shading, but I lightened it a tad. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:21, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. 14:42, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Daisy (Q) ~ Redone
My first queen! The shading was blotchy and undefined, and the earpink was too light, so I redid it. Comments? I've blurred the shading as much as possible... 00:10, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Original artist was Ashshadow. 00:11, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. Get rid of the light spot on her ankle, it seems misplaced to me. 00:12, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I accidently added a light spot while doing the tail shading. Re-Uploaded. 00:01, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Blur the stomach highlight, it looks a bit stony right now, or mottled. 23:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

What? On the 23rd hour, again? xD Re-Uploaded. 23:01, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail (W) - Redone
- I know it wasn't supposed to be re-done, but while I was tweaking it I realized I had just made the image worse. I re-did it and I realized it looks a lot more better. So, comments? I think the original artist was Dawnfeather. (Foolish me, re-doing an image by a legend) 00:25, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see the changes in even the history. Could you try reuploading it again (that always seems to help) and I don't blame you for redoing it because the lineart looks blurred. 00:27, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I didn't upload it. =P But now I did. 00:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind it's showing. There is a strip of lighter color on her front part of the haunch, and define the shading on the white parts of her tail and front leg. Very nice! 00:29, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

What was wrong with the old one? You know i had when people redo images that dont need to be.... And i really liked the old one. 00:30, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, in my opinion, I think this is better, but it's mine. 00:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

You didnt answer my question. And of course you think yours is better, everyone wants to do torties. 00:33, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, I believe it had blurred lineart. I think that's probably why. 00:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's not because I did it. It's because I just think I did the style a bit...better. And what was wrong with the old one, I'm pretty sure I explained it, that I made it look worse. 00:36, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the patches look more like her original image, and darken the shading. 00:41, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened shading and added dapples, because she's dappled. 00:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard to see the ear pink. Also, I like this one better then Dawnfeather's. *waits to get shot* 01:00, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: *shoots* But thanks. :P 01:08, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but unless her other images are being tweaked too for some reason, you should have the markings match. Otherwise, the other images will have to be redone to match this one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:34, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The other image needs dapples. 02:13, September 11, 2011 (UTC)