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Cow(R) - For Approval
Alright, so unless it says in the books she was named after the apperance of a cow, I'm giving her the apperance of my cat since the last time I did that, the cat's description was magically changed by an author later on, so let's try this pattern again. The eyes are also a warmer green color but if they look too yellow I can tweak them a bit. But yeah, as always, if something's outta place then just tell me! I had fun with this  01:33, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her side just a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 04:42, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge (i assume thats what you did, judging by how it looks) the shading a lot more. I can /see/ the smudge marks... 10:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't smudge on Sai. She has fur texture  04:53, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Either way, I can see strange markings on the main body where I think the shading is meant to be. 13:42, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Yes, I plan on working on her tonight, offline has been kicking my ass  04:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  05:34, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but the white can stand to be smoothed out a little more. It looks sharp on the chest and the shading still looks a tad blotchy. 22:07, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

How/where is it exactly blotchy? 05:36, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

I guess just smooth it out in general

I think the image could be darkened a tad. 21:56, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Just a reminder here to not forget to upload! 02:56, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not, remember that I have obligations outside of the Wiki and I will reupload in the timeframe allotted   04:50, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  07:19, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Hate to break the CBA, but I think the dot on her hind leg can stand to be blurred/smudged a little more. 07:56, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Also, the forepaw closest to us looks kind of gray. 06:13, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

The chest can be smudged and the shading could be msoothed out some more. 13:50, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the white should be smudged/blurred more, if you don't mind. 20:26 Thu Nov 26

I've already stated this, but I cannot smudge on Sai  08:58, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, maybe blur it then? Or use a different program? Or smooth it out in a different way, like add some on the edges on a lower opacity? 21:32 Fri Nov 27

I honestly think it's fine, and you guys are being way too picky. There is nothing wrong with having the white how it is; smudging isn't even mandatory on any image.

I agree it looks fine honestly. And iveh if you need help smudging in SAI i csn help c: 21:43, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Ok but even if the white was agreed to look fine, the part where the shading needs to be smoothed out is still not addressed. 02:25, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

And it still can be blurred. 05:51, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Why does it need to be blurred? If he blurs the shading, then you guys will start saying it's too flat and force him to define it. This shading is no different from shading on other images, and I really don't see any issues with it.

Reuploaded  19:09, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Because it looks really sharp and a tad blotchy. I still think it should be smoothed out a small bit more. 15:28, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink looks purple. Try color picking from an existing black cat image to get a right color. 09:56, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

I have smoothed out the shading as absolutely as best as I can. I've seen cats on here with incredibly sharp shading and they are fine. If I do it anymore you won't be able to see shading anymore. 00:19, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the front paw socks just a tad. Misty~ (talk) 04:25, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

It already looks blurred enough to me. Darken the shading a smidge along the upper front leg/front shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:51, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 09:33, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. 10:38, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading around the paws, and maybe blur the shading into the pelt more? -   Fla      me    people change  22:21, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I can't blur the shading anymore or you won't be able to see it anymore  06:55, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks blurred enough. Just define it. 07:09, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

There's a spot of blotchy shading above the shoulder. 18:28, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Icy, it's fine. If he smooths it out any more, one, it'll contradict what Burnt just told him to do, and two, he'll just get told to re-define it. This is getting extremely pick with the shading, and when one person tells him to do something, he gets contradicted a comment or two later. o.O

No it's not fine. There's one spot that's seriously blotchy and it can be smoothed out and defined. Those are tow different things. 23:18, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

No, it doesn't need to be smoothed out, because it's not blotchy to begin with. I fail to see the blotchy shading and there is nothing wrong with it. Different people have different styles, and I see absolutely nothing wrong with the shading.

Yes but just because you can see it fine doesn't mean others can. Can we have some more opinions on this? 23:26, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Skye, honestly. I've looked at it on multiple screens and it doesn't look blotchy to me. It's fine. 23:54, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did what I could but tbh I really don't want to touch the shading anymore, otherwise it'll be too blurred and you guys will just nominate it for a tweak later on so nah  05:33, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you try and define the shading in general? Mainly on the main body. 05:37, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Mistpelt (Star) - For Approval
tired lil elder cat 03:50 Fri Nov 13

sharpen and expand the shading

I don't think she should sharpen it but she could definitely blur it and expand it a lot. 07:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's like a dot in the far lower left corner? 13:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 02:35 Sat Nov 14

expand the shading everywhere, especially on the tail. Define the light on the legs.

reuploaded. redid shading again. idk if this is good or not 22:41 Tue Nov 17

Comments before approval? 01:01, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading depth could be defined a lot. It's looking a bit flat on the tail and forelegs.

There's a weird streak of pale texture on the tail.. mind fixing that? 21:47, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 03:06, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. redid shading. again. 03:18 Sun Nov 22

Comments before approval? 00:06, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading on the legs is still flat

it's fine. I took a look at her file and that's the best she can get it without having it look even worse. re-CBA? 05:44, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Nope. just because she can't do it, doesn't mean it's fine. please define it, it looks very flat. 04:55, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

that's what i've been trying to do for the past 3 uploads. can you possibly give me a hint on to how to deepen it then? cause nothing i'm doing seems to work. 01:41 Wed Nov 25

Perhaps add a new layer of thinner, darker shading?

I can't see where the light source is. Could you define it? 20:25 Thu Nov 26

reuploaded tried a new light source. 22:51 Fri Nov 27

I'm going to be that person but I seriously still can't see any shading on the face and legs. :x

Define it on the tail too. 09:57, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

reuploaded barely 02:03 Wed Dec 2

CBA?

Ok the tail shading looks incoherent and the light on the chest needs definition. 10:32, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:22 Thu Dec 3

Re-CBA?

shading seems a bit blotchy where the tail is touching the body.--Belllastar (talk) 03:52, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I blurred it as much as I can without it totally fading away and thus getting a 'define the tail shading' comment soo.. any opinions? also, change the heading when you break a CBA. 04:12 Fri Dec 4

It's fine it really is. Re-CBA? 14:02, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I agree with Belllastar. Also, please lay off pushing for it to get approved. We get it, but the constant re-CBAing, with the "it's fine", is making it seem like you just want it approved. Also, the texture seems a bit softer on her elder image.

Smoothe out the shading on the paws and tail? —   <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">Fla      <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">me    <font color="#FF7F50">I can and I will  22:34, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. Uh, Cloudy? I didn't necessarily say it was fine... I only asked for a second opinion, and Icy gave hers. Even though Icy thought it was fine, I understand others didn't, and that's okay.. at least I asked for more opinions instead of dismissing it altogether. <span style="">02:17 Sun Dec 6

can you get rid of or thin out the lighter streak on her back? it looks like a stripe or something. 15:39, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">18:45 Sun Dec 6

Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink into the pelt, it looks like it cuts off very abruptly. 23:07, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

I think you could smooth out the shading on the main body and tail more. also, the shading is leaking on the legs. (Remember to blur the edges of the shading only so that it doesn't end up leaking)

The shading is leaking on the chest and where the tail-tip is over the body as well. Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 14:01, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Please reupload under File:Rockfall.star.png from now on, thank you. I've renamed it for you, but for future reference, please remember the naming guidelines that we have. They can be found above the reservation table on the main page.

Yep, I'm still working, I was out of town for a long time, so i had no accsess to my computer.

Reups.

The shading looks a little flat imo, and the fur needs to be smudged into the fur a bit. —   <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">Fla      <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">me    <font color="#FF7F50">I can and I will  22:35, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Oops wrong file.Reuploaded.

Echosnout (Star) ~ For Approval
The MC is hard to match. 23:33, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white parts a lot, and smudge the earpink a little more. 00:17, Nov. 21, 2015 (UTC)

for some reason the eyes look strange to me... Maybe define the gradient of them?

Reupload I tried moving the pupil's away from the lighter part of the eye. 19:48, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the main body shading a bit? <span style="">17:22 Sun Nov 22

Smudge the black a bit more.

Reupload 19:18, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

define your light source on the chest

You mean cover the light spot? It's usually fine with other images, and the light source is coming from the <---. 04:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

if it's coming from <== there, then the leg shading is in the wrong place. Switch it, please.

No, the light source is coming from there. The shading will be ==> that way then. 07:45, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ahh, I see. I thought you meant that the light was hitting <== this way. But that means the chest shading is in the wrong direction. Perhaps flip that around?

I'm sorry I'm still confused. 20:41, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just swap the position of the chest shading around. 23:30, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I think I understand what you mean now. 07:29, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Note quite. This is what I meant for you to do with the chest: http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283593286300.png

Reupload Like that? 19:40, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you get rid of some of the shading on <== side of the chest? Now the whole chest looks shaded, whereas part of the chest on that side should be in light like Fox's image shows. 21:53, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:21, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the white, like on the mc? <span style="">20:22 Thu Nov 26

Reupload 20:57, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

define the facial shading

Reupload 00:58, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the black parts of the body. 04:09, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

This is optional, but could you add some shading to the chin? It looks oddly bright. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:56, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 21:52, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

define the facial shading, it looks really flat.

I'm not quite sure where the light source is. Shade along the bottom of the chest? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:53, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:33, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the shading alot more around the paws, and define the earpink on the left. —   <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">Fla      <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">me    <font color="#FF7F50">I can and I will  22:36, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Uh, the paws are more blurred than the rest of the shading, and the ear pink on the left is much easier to see than the one on the right. 22:49, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 02:34, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, this is kinda picky, but on the white streak on the muzzle the white seems to be smudged strangely inwards. Can you fill in that little divot? <span style="">18:55 Sun Dec 6

Dew Nose (ES) ~ For Approval
18:41, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Just brighten up the white a tad on the nose and tail? --Dewsplash (talk) 18:46, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad thicker on her kit image.

Reups 18:42, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

could you brighten the white on the tail tip just a little more? Then I think this would be ready for a CBA.

Could you add some shading to the white tail tip. 10:41, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups There already was shading on the tail tip, but I've defined it. 16:41, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:34, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge the stripes a little tiny bit more? The edges are just a little bit softer on the kit, I think. This is pretty :) 14:12, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Also, I still have the kit's file if you want it. Most of the image is either in shading or highlights (with the black covering most of what isnt) so it might match better if you can pick the colors from the file. 14:15, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

The file would be fantastique; I'll give you my email. 02:02, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reups merci Shinx 01:11, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (Star) - For Approval
Bleh, I'll probably redo the shading later. Stoatskip (talk) 19:23, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, that's better. Stoatskip (talk) 20:14, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps try blurring the stipes? Nice. Misty~ (talk) 22:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

could you also add some depth to the shading on the main body? it looks a little flat. the eyes are beautiful, by the way! <span style="">22:36 Fri Nov 27

Thicken the stripes - they look way too thin.

Re-ups Thank you! Stoatskip (talk) 14:33, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think you still need to blur the stripes more. Misty~ (talk) 01:37, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes more tapered.

Re-ups I can't really blur them more than they are now. 15:52, November 29, 2015

You seem to know what you're doing and this looks more than 50% done so I am going to go ahead and promote you to an apprentice. 16:29, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail just a smidge? <span style="">23:05 Sun Nov 29

The stripes seem to be much darker on her other images. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 05:38, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Have you shaded the ear-pink and nose yet? If not, can you please do that? Thanks. If it's not compulsory, then my apologies Misty~ (talk) 05:54, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's not required, I don't think; I didn't do it on my earlier images. Anyway, maybe define the eye depth a little? 01:39, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

can you darken the stripes a little? I think they're darker on the others. 10:01, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to, but could you connect some of the stripes on their shoulder? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  10:10, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Oops, almost forgot I was working on this. 22:50, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes still look too thin, imo.

Drizzle (ES) ~ For Approval
Love the name. Hate the texture though. Not sure it matches that well :/ 12:57, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you did pretty well matching it :) But the texture could stand to be lightened quite a bit, as it isn't that dark. Also the chest patch only goes down a little bit, and it's like a bib. 13:23, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the ear shading a tad? Looks very lovely :-) <span style="">02:58 Thu Dec 3 The white is to thick in my opinion, it looks like she has white streaked fur. --Belllastar (talk) 17:26, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just my screen, but I think the gray on the kit image might be a bit darker. 22:08, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 11:12, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I can get you the file from Storm if you need it Shinx? 13:43, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'd appreciate that :) 14:24, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Night (Ro)(ES) - CBA
I think i redo the shading next upload 21:17, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the paws, as they look rather gray. Very nice! 21:57, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

the white on her face should extend up to nearly the top of her head and end in a point, and the white on her neck should extend further outwards like on the loner. 06:36, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

brighten the white on the top of her nose.

could you lighten the shading on -> this ear a tad bit? it's drowning out the earpink color. <span style="">21:24 Thu Dec 3

Re-ups 21:26, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Harepounce (Star) ~ For Approval
First charart without using a tablet o.o Props to those of you who do this without one. PS, there are highlights. Let me know if I should turn them off^^ 23:23, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Wow, this is awesome! Could you smooth the shading on the ---> side of the tail? what's a tablet? <span style="">0:01 Sat Dec 5

I never use a tablet to make my images. Touchpad for life, yo. ^^ Smooth out the chest shading, if you don't mind?

reuploaded I did this with the touchpad and I'm still not entirely sure how I feel about it haha. Although this did make me start liking doing blurred shading a little more^^ 00:24, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Really I dont think the highlights or needed, this is beautiful! just a suggestion, i dont know how it would look without highlights since you make charart differently from what i do lol 00:32, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out overall just a little. 13:37, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded Let me know if it doesn't look like the changes are showing. 14:56, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should remove the highlights, as they are throwing off the color a bit. <span style="">15:37 Sun Dec 6

reuploaded Also fixed some blotchy shading that was soften by the highlights. 19:53, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen and lighten the shading.

Fallowsong (Star) ~ For Approval
I love making StarClan eyes! Colors from the queen. <span style="">23:58 Fri Dec 4

Smooth out the overall shading, please.

Darken the shading a tad on the chest, it looks at bit lighter than the rest of the shading. It very well could be my monitor, since we all know how it likes to show things lighter than they are lol. 00:14, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The shading may need to be blurred more. <span style="">0:28 Sat Dec 5

Could be blurred a lot more. 00:51, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">13:50 Sat Dec 5

Thistle (ES) - For Approval
I never noticed how hard it was to match tabby images... Dangit. Anyways. Comments? 11:59, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  12:05, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think the whole of (our right) ear needs to be filled with earponk. While I'm here, in response to your message; I do have the file, and I'll happily send it to you! Sling me your email address and you'll find the file in your inbox by tomorrow. 02:01, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you~ 10:38, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  13:30, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Beetle (DF) - For Approval
???? 21:09, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

his brown front paw should be black, the black on the tail should extend a bit further, and the far hind paw's black should be extended a little bit too. 21:12, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 01:07, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the dark patches some? <span style="">02:19 Sun Dec 6

They're not blurred they're smudged. 02:36, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge them more. Also, the texture is more.... Scribbly, to say. The texture here looks too straight. 02:44, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

I only said blur because the rogue's patches are softer. <span style="">18:53 Sun Dec 6

re-uploaded: Ok so I think I damaged this even more than it already is <_< 23:28, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Idk but the black splotches look like shading on the bottom

Rooktail (StC) - For Evaluation
Hngghh this is really bad. —   <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">Fla      <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">me    <font color="#FF7F50">I can and I will  21:24, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define shading? Also, since this is your first charart, this needs to be titled 'For Evaluation' 22:55, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Um, I sort of lost the file because my power went out a few hours ago.. so I'll probably have to redo it. x.x —   <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">Fla      <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">me    <font color="#FF7F50">I can and I will  01:01, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten him up a bit? I have to strain to see the lineart. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  10:08, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be lightened. I can see all the lineart just fine, and the shade matches the warrior. Maybe define the earpink a little bit though? 19:15, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Shivering Rose (Ki) ~ For Evaluation
First charart!! I made this in FireAlpaca. Comments? 21:11, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define highlights ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:31, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  21:37, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (TC) (Star) - For Approval
23:41, December 6, 2015 (UTC)