Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 28

Hawkfoot- Approved
Here she is! Comments? Hawkfire Talk! 02:31, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I like it! But I think I can see some red on her shoulder, belly, and hindleg--Nightfall101 02:39, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

And the right eye looks kinda....creepy--Nightfall101 04:43, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I like it too :). All I can see is, that the pink in the ears probably needs to be blend a little. --Holly!

Nightfall, she's looking to one side, like she's looking over her shoulder. But I admit, it kind of makes it look creepy-like. Anyway, the ear pink could be shifted to the left more (our left) and the highlights + shading needs to be blurred more. Plus, the eye should have more than one shade of color in it. Otherwise, she's great! --Rainwhisker 09 19:23, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the title so it's spelled right, hope you don't mind. I love the cat by the way. Maybe just make the eyes a little less creepy. * shudders * --Honeyrose34 16:31, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the eyes and blended the shading and highlights the best I could. Hawkfire Talk! 23:04, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

She's awesome! I don't really see anything wrong or could it just be my eyes? I think I'm blind. Great job! Icestorm May StarClan Light Your Path! 02:36, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I like this! Just like everybody else has said. Man, what is with all these cliches I'm using? I almost used "We need to talk" in a fanfiction I'm writing! Somebody help! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:41, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

I have a couple of small things, I'm afraid. The eye still looks a little odd, scary almost. Look at Willowpelt and Brightheart and copy the eye from those. The ear pink needs to be blended and there is a small piece of lineart on the shoulder that looks unusualy thick as if it's been blurred slightly then corrected. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:42, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hawkey Rawr! LOL 19:47, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -san  23:28, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Ferretpaw (A) - Approved
Not sure what to think of this one... --  Icy -chan  03:17, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

His description say that he was a cream and gray, and the cream looks, orangey-pink, could you make it more creamy like Daisy or Berrynose w/ out the brown part. Hope that can help!!! --Honeyrose34 17:23, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? I redid the whole image. --  Icy -chan  19:43, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The tail looks very flat, if you know what I mean. Add some shading to it. :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

(S) - His tail is already shaded though. Maybe add a highlight in the middle instead? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 13:04, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Whoops. Wow, I forgot to add shading on the tail. *face-palm* How did I forget that? Anyway...I can't see the changes yet, but if/when they show up, is this any better? (If it doesn't show up by later I'll try uploading again...) --  Icy -chan  15:53, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, this is kinda weird. The changes don't show on the current image, but they do on a past image...should I try reverting the image, or just waiting awhile longer? --  Icy -chan  18:47, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Try re-uploading the image. Sometimes the uploading system's touchy. Also, the shading should be blurred more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-ish. Grr...I uploaded it again, you can click on the image and see, the newer version is showing in the past thumbnails, but not the current image. Does anyone know how to fix it? Should I upload it as a new file? --  Icy -chan  20:54, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

As I said above on my Rushpaw image, I just decided to upload a new file. Now that I've got the correct image, any comment and suggestions? --  Icy -chan  17:40, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I think this looks great. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble -san  23:28, November 29, 2009 (UTC)