Warriors Wiki talk:World/Archive 11

Mentor ~ Silver Nomination
I'm adding in a LOT of references right now, but other than that, I think it's ready for silver! 21:38, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

There! References added. Comments? 23:36, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Add the mentors listed for A Heart of a Warrior section''. 10:13, June 21, 2011 (UTC)''

Wow, I can't believe I forgot to do that. I'll do it right now! 16:15, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more citations to the Process section? It has a few, but could use a few more. 18:46, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

I added in the mentors. And btw, every sentence except for one has a reference in the Process, so I don't think I can add anymore! :P 02:44, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lol! It looks awesome Squirrelflame! 10:29, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or are there no references starting from the Dawn section? 12:42, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

No, its not just you :P Add in the references, and otherwise, it looks great! 17:14, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added in the references. Took a while, though. :P Anything else? 15:07, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks astounding. I don't see anything else. 02:24, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Changed a few refs to notes. Looking great now. 19:54, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oh thanks! Any other comments? 21:44, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed after more votes are over... 16:25, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, since this is relatively late compared to other nominations above, it might take a while. 18:02, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 17:44, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Leadership Ceremony ~ Silver Nomination
It looks good to me, but I think it needs a bit more information. Any suggestions, or does it looks good the way it is? 13:35, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

All I see that needs to be done is see if you can find the specific Erin Hunter chat that corresponds to Reference 6. 14:16, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also find a few references for the last three paragraphs of Process? 17:06, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Got it! 10:21, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe one ref for the first paragraph of Process and one ref for the second to last paragraph of Process? 15:09, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but I might need a little bit of help. I am still a bit busy. Can anyone help if possible? :3 10:22, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, I'll help! 16:25, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

There, done! Better, Rainey? 16:29, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you so much Squirrelflame! It looks much better now. Anything else? 03:07, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I think it looks great! 18:19, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, and it's all thanks to you Squirreflame! Thanks so much! =D 07:53, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

You're welcome! 20:45, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

So....anything else? 09:24, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, I don't think so. CBV? 21:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 16:45, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Medicine Cat Ceremony ~ Silver Nomination
Since everyone seems to be nominating the ceremonies, I did this one. :P I expanded it a bit, and added lots of citations. Comments? 18:04, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add citations for the words medicine cat use to give their apprentice their full name? If not, it looks great! 10:32, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, same. One reference for the actual words of the ceremony. But other than that, looks great! 15:10, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but the words are from the same reference as the sentence after that, so I don't think I should. 00:34, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, get it from a different reference then. I'll add it in. 16:33, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

There. I think the whole article looks a lot better! 16:34, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Anything else? 18:19, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. Looks splendid! 17:51, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 21:20, July 5, 2011 (UTC)V

Vote is up! 17:19, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wolf - Silver Nomination
I edited the article significantly to fit the guidelines. I added a description section, and expanded everything. I added several citations from external sources. 16:49, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add a refernece for the intro and a few more for Relations to Cats? 22:51, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add a few more references. Great work! 00:32, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 23:40, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks great! 03:06, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Splendid. 03:23, June 30, 2011 (UTC)T

This will be CBVed after more votes close. 15:51, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 21:23, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 20:44, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

leaving
i'm leaving this wiki:(. Can someone take my name out of this project? Spottedstar42 The WWi ki van dals Mu st fall!!!  22:58, June 29, 2011 (UTC)\

Okay, I'll remove you, but you'll be missed. Bye! 16:13, July 1, 2011 (UTC)