Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Nominations/Declined 4

Fallowfern (KP) - Redo Nomination
File:Fallowfern.kittypet.png - To be honest, the colors on the kittypet are pretty different from the loner and the rogue and the shading could be thickened. I suppose it could be a tweak, but it might save us some grief to just redo it. 01:17, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * May I have this if it passes? 01:18, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Kittypet's not being used due to a lack of a cite.
 * Maybe this could be changed for the warrior? The warrior seems to have the same issues. I'd like it, should it be changed. 01:25, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * Warrior, queen, and loner all match in the coloring. I did the warrior and queen and Sheepy did the loner, which she got the colors from me.
 * 1:28 Wed Aug 28 2013
 * 01:32, August 28, 2013 (UTC)
 * 04:39, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 12:02, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt. L) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Leafstar.leader.alt.png Okie this is one of my old images and the shading is really flat and the patches look like I just added paint on the pelt. If it passes can I do this? owo
 * We're not using it, sadly. ;-; I think it's because the manga's grayscale and we can't tell what colors she is.
 * Oops. I am a derp.

Rowanstar ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Rowanstar.star.png and leader. The black on the leader looks a bit brownish, and the brown markings don't look so brown, but rather ginger-ish. 00:02, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * 'tis fine to me.
 * Before reading this I thought they were ginger... 12:26, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * if this passes, I'd like this. Personally, I think it looks fine, but i could be biased 15:33, August 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 04:41, August 31, 2013 (UTC)
 * 13:34, September 1, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14:45, September 1, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing
 * 15:22 Sun Sep 1 2013
 * 17:23, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (D) = Tweak Nomination
File:Squirrelflight.deputy.png Back shading is receded, paw shading is flat. 04:18 Tue Sep 3


 * Back shading isn't receded; I talked to Loonie while she was making this- the light's coming from directly overheard, not from one angle or another. 04:28, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * Just because it's not darker or something doesn't mean it's receding from the lineart. It's fine.
 * Looks fine. 4:59 Tue Sep 3 2013
 * Ohh thanks Leggo 8D may I withdraw this nomination then? wow im dumb 06:18 Tue Sep 3
 * I think we should leave the nomination up, for reference and evidence for future nomimations, and just in case anyone else has an important point to make, so that's why I'm casting a vote. 21:39, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21:45, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * 10:01, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Brightspirit (W) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Brightspirit.warrior.png The images do not match each other at all. On the warrior, she seems much darker and the stripes are overblurred compared to the StarClan image. It should be made to match the StarClan image. 17:54, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think the warrior's being used at all, because we don;t know if she was ever a warrior. 18:02, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * The narrator does describe her as a "dead warrior" in Long Shadows, but I can't remember which page. It's sometime when she takes him to the catmint. 18:24, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think Mallowfur's the same case.... I believe warrior was used as a general term? I've seen leaders still called warriors of StarClan, so.. uh... Regardless, if we're still using it, I'll swipe this, since I did the StarClan image and the colors aren't what they seem.
 * If it turns out that we are using the image, then yes, it does need to be redone. However, both points are equally valid and I'm not too sure which one to go with. 22:43, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Them not matching was my foul to begin with, as I was told that I didn't need to match the warrior image since it wasn't being used at all.
 * I understand, Cloudy. ^^ 00:00, August 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * I should think that warrants her a warrior image. 04:25, August 26, 2013 (UTC)
 * Whether or not she gets a warrior images goes to PC. We just handle the art, guys. Which, it was already decided before that she wouldn't get one based on the evidence that we have. If you've found something else that could be used, by all means, bring it up, but not here.
 * PC's discussion. Also, I looked in Long Sadows and I couldn't find where you meant Hawk. So until she definitely gets a warrior image. It shouldn't be redone because its not being used. 21:40, August 29, 2013 (UTC)
 * Let's keep it rolling, shall we?
 * 11:05, September 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15:41 Wed Sep 4 2013
 * 11:50, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Gorseclaw (TC) - Redo Nomination
File:Gorseclaw (TC).kit.png and File:Gorseclaw (TC).star.png. In his description it says he bears a striking resemblance to Tigerstar and since they were redone wouldn't he need to match them? If these pass might I snag them? 00:45 Sat Sep 7
 * Good point. 15:55, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think so. Resembling someone isn't the same as being identical, in my opinion. 16:15 Sat Sep 7 2013
 * As above. Bearing a resemblance to someone could be just like sharing the same body tone or facial structure - there's a new girl at my school who's awfully similar looking to this other girl, and when I put them together I realized that they indeed do have the same facial and body structure, but they look nothing alike in terms of color, hair, etc. 17:25, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17:53, 09/7/2013
 * 18:07, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18:17, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 20:45, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Appledawn (W) ~ Redo nomination
File:Appledawn.warrior.png Sorry, gotta nominate... Unrealistic stripes. This image is great, though~ 06:38 Wed Sep 11
 * No. This image is perfectly acceptable and the stripes are fine.
 * no no and no. 06:45, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope. 10:15, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * No. 11:39, 09/11/2013
 * ^^ 12:03, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * No. 14:53, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Snowtuft (R) - Redo nomination
File:Snowtuft.rogue.png First, shading is flat and gray; second, scar is overblurred; third, scar seems to be put on with a low-opacity brush, as you can see faint marks wher brushings ended and started. That leaves just the pelt color and eyes left, so I'm guessing this would be best off as a redo. /shot 05:50 Wed Sep 11
 * Tweak. I have the file.
 * Personally, I don't think anything needs fixed. 18:17 Wed Sep 11 2013
 * 19:01, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Possibly a tweak. 20:40, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Agreeing with Cloudy. 20:59, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) - Redo nomination
File:Sharpclaw (SC).deputy.png File:Sharpclaw.warrior.png, ect. Probably gonna get shot for this, but shading on a lot of the images are kinda inconsistent and flat, and the images generally don't match much in color and pattern. If this passes can I have the deputy, kit, and rogue?
 * If this passes, may I have the warrior?   23:17, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * If this passes, I want the kittypet. 23:34, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * They seem fine to me...
 * May I have the warrior if the oa doesn't want it and if this passes, please? 00:22, September 12, 2013(UTC)
 * They could use a shading tweak and that's it 00:32, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 00:36, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * Possibly a tweak. 02:10, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * Actually, this should only be a tweak. 22:15, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll reiterate this if this it goes to a tweak nomination, but I would like to do the kit as the original artist, please. 03:32, September 18, 2013 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt2. A) - Redo Nomination
File:Heathertail.apprentice.alt2.png In my opinion, the shading looks quite flat, and the smudging of the earpink really bothers me. I really think I could do much better with this now. Also, redo nomination because I've lost the file, and think it'd be better redone, than tweaked. If this passes, I'd like it. 14:53, September 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * It could still be a pretty easy tweak.
 * I say go for it.
 * It does look quite flat. 16:10, September 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * I kinda agree with Stoner.. you can still tweak this without the file? I've been able to tweak shading issues like this without the file fine. 18:34 Sat Sep 14
 * This would be quite a simple tweak, actually. 00:19, September 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * It would be an easy tweak. 01:06, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Just layer over another layer of shading, it can be done without the original file  23:48, September 15, 2013 (UTC) Agreed. 03:32, September 18, 2013 (UTC) Since it's Shoon's own image if she would rather redo than tweak it then I don't see why not. 19:35 Wed Sep 18 2013

Snooky (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Snooky.warrior.png Very minor but on his other images his eyes are blue, but on this one they are green. 23:56, September 22, 2013 (UTC)
 * a tweak nomination isn't needed and i'll do it now hang on.
 * done.

Redtail (De) and (Ki) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Redtail.deputy.pngFile:Redtail.kit.png The tails on both of them don't really match the other images: the kit has no spots/dappled and the deputy ones are overblurred. Also, the deputy's patches could be smudged a bit more to match the StarClan image. 01:25, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15:28, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think they match fine. The shading is a touch shiny, but it doesn't look bad. 15:33 Fri Sep 13 2013
 * They look fine to me.
 * Agreeing with the above. 19:05, September 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * 00:20, September 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * 02:34, September 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 03:34, September 18, 2013 (UTC)

Bess ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Bess.rogue.png and kittypet. She's described as black-and-white, so she'd need more white, besides her paws. 21:07, October 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * May I snag the rogue, if this passes and Berry dosen't want it? 21:11, October 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't see how, though? She's black and white, and just because the white happens to be on her paws, doesn't make her any less of a black and white cat?
 * <span style="">23:09 Fri Oct 4 2013
 * 23:15, October 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 00:45, October 5, 2013 (UTC)
 * 00:42, October 6, 2013 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC Alt) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Mothwing.mc.alt.png I think the shading could use a bit of defining. I'd like it if it passes and if Mounty doesn't want it. 21:38, October 3, 2013 (UTC)
 * It looks fine to me.
 * 20:41, October 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21:03, October 4, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21:10, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * 14:28, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt 2 W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Bluestar.warrior.alt2.png I think that the shading could be darkened/defined, and I sort of have to squint to see it. If this passes and the OA doesn't want it, I'd like it, please. 23:20, October 10, 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think this image is currently in use, but still, if it passes, I'd like it as the OA 02:22, October 11, 2013 (UTC)
 * Oh, whoops. The image actually isn't in use. I guess this nomination can be terminated, then? 20:46, October 11, 2013 (UTC)

Mudfur ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Mudfur.star.png etc. EXCEPT for the warrior and the alt. I didn't know if this should be a tweak or a redo so I put tweak. None of them match the warrior, and in my eyes, the warrior looks the best, so they might as well be redone/tweaked to match it. 22:49, September 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * Personally, I'd redo or tweak the kit or meddie cat apprentice. If not then, maybe all of them.. Idk.
 * You can redo/tweak them to whatever you see fit, unless otherwise is said, of course. 23:02, September 16, 2013 (UTC)
 * My vote would be bias for this is my own image, but I'd like to throw in an opinion. In my opinion, the style of the mottles matches alright; and to save time and work, wouldn't it seem just a bit wiser to tweak or redo the warrior to match the other images, instead of every other image? Just throwing in my opinion. 02:39, September 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * I honestly don't think they need to be fixed. They match pretty well in my eyes. <span style="">19:39 Wed Sep 18 2013
 * The warrior was made after the medicine cat image, and the medicine cat image was originally his alternate image. If anything it should be made to match the others, but I don't think it's as off as it's being made to be.  02:49, September 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Personally, I agree with Breezy, but if this does get tweaked or redone, I agree with Ivy.
 * Eh, they seem good enough to me, and not every image can match 9001%. Each artist has different styles and ways of doing things, and they match pretty well to my eyes.
 * 21:10, September 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 22:25, September 30, 2013 (UTC)
 * 21:12, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
 * The kit could take some work as well as the MC's shading, so I'd say keep all the other's <span style="">06:56 Wed Oct 9

Crowfeather (A) - Redo Nomination
File:Crowfeather.apprentice.png It doesn't match the loner and warrior. I'd like him if I'm confirmed as ready to tweak via the discussion page and the OA doesn't want him. <span style="">04:27 Mon Oct 14
 * It was just redone and it's fine.
 * agreeing with Cloudy. 14:31, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

The texture can be tweaked but it does not need to be redone whatsoever  19:35, October 14, 2013 (UTC) 19:41, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19:42, October 14, 2013 (UTC)

Mintfur (SC) (W) - Redo Nomiantion
File:Mintfur (SC).warrior.png It doesn't really match the other images and it's kinda shiny. x3 19:41, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd like this if it passes o3o   19:45, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd like a shot at this, please. :) 19:58, October 14, 2013 (UTC)
 * nope 03:08, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Looks fine to me. Not every image can match perfectly, but these are more than good enough.
 * 10:37, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * Close enough. <span style="">13:33 Tue Oct 15 2013
 * I agree with Duck. 20:43, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think it's alright. I personally like the shiny-ness. x3

Tawnypelt (A) (Alt) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Tawnypelt.apprentice.alt.png The shading source could be defined a little, the highlight on the face moved to the other side. <span style="">02:12 Wed Oct 23
 * This was just approved and it's fine. Stop nitpicking on my images. >.>
 * 04:57, October 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 15:50, October 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Agreed. It's perfectly fine. 16:45, October 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18:49, October 23, 2013 (UTC)

Hollowflight (A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Hollowflight.apprentice.png I'm not sure if this would be a tweak or a redo, so I'll just put this as a tweak. The pelt color does not match the warrior, and it seems a tad yellowish/greenish. Also, the stripes seems to be inconsistent with the body flow and don't match well. If no-one minds, could I have this one, please? 20:56, October 15, 2013 (UTC)
 * The apprentice was meant to be tweaked and actually never was. That was partially my error when I was cleaning up the page. Apologies.
 * 19:54, October 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * So if this were meant to be tweaked, can I just start up the tweak now, because it had already been nominated? 20:53, October 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, go right ahead.