Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Graypool (Ki) ~ Redo
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a girl? ouo 19:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

To confirm, I did a tweak on it. I noticed you weren't sure. 19:56, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading a lot. 23:42, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Does this shading make more sense? 17:02, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing, reupload it again so we can at least see it in the file history? 19:26, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I uploaded it again but I'm not sure that it'll show the changes. 00:14, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the chest if there is any owo 15:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't intend to have shading there, but I could add it in if you want. 18:05, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading, and the shading near the chest-area (sorta on the neck) looks blotchy. Thin it out and make it less round? x3 00:38, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Cinder? o3o 12:53, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-.- I'm such a fail. Sorry i was out for a while but I had meant to re-upload. Anyway changes aren't showing. 23:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

This shading still doesn't look right. I suggest just using the one in the tutortial. Also blur the shading. And make her nose gray. 14:58, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Redone
I probably need to blur the shading here too. OA was Goldencloud tweaked by Appledash. Comments? 22:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make tthe earpink smaller, and yes, blur the shading. 23:08, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 13:38 Mon Apr 16

Define the ear pink as well.

This is optional, but can you make the "highlight" on her flank bigger? 14:57, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:17, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlight on her left arm, and (this is optional) add a highlight on the chest, so it looks like there's a pretty light source. :3 00:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, still.

Widen the belly "highlight" some moar. 07:46, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just realised there's waste around it, and I think I'm just going to redo the shading. I'll upload it tomorrow. 01:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:21, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:39, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:27, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (ki) - Redone
eeeeee, so proud. *squees* Okay, I'm done. OA was Shimmersong, Tweak by Bramble, redone by Mistypebble. Redone due to Lack of realistic stripes. So, besides darkening the stripes (I'm looking at it compared to the rest, and kicking myself), what else needs to be done? Maple On dA and Skye 21:11, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading. 21:21, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

The chest highlight looks a little bright 02:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes and blur/smudge them and the stripes seem to fade into the chest on the other images, try to match that. Also define the earpink. 03:24, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the outer edges of the chest more opaque :3 07:43, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Maplefern? 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yep! It was a very busy week this week, sorry. D: Maple On dA and Skye 11:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Redone
Yeah, the stripes are kinda sloppy... :3 OA = Shimmerpool, and then it was tweaked many times. It needs to match the other images. Comments? 23:42, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Eep! So cute~ 8D Can you define the earpink and make the shading have reddish/brown tint to it so it matches the warrior? And I think there is a white pixel on his forehead. 01:28, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

smuge the stripes moar. cute <3333  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 03:05, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly and on the neck. Breeze whisker  03:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Oi... I lost the layers to this one, and I'm just not up for redoing it. =( I'm gonna withdraw this one... 01:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Could I take a try at it? 12:08, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Just remember to reserve it the correct way.

Reuploaded' 22:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading and smudge the stripes. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  23:58, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, as well, pweeze! :) 02:31, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:39, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading and darken/blacken the stripes. 02:16, 22, 04, 2012

Make the earpnk easier to see please. 14:14, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more to watch the other images. 16:37, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:29, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
I'll take away the pale chest if needed. Redone for triangly stripes. I guess we aren't listing OA's anymore soo. Comments? 21:54, 04 17, 2012

I thought Sky still had claim to this. 22:18 Tue Apr 17

-sigh- If she does, I don't know. It wasn't reserved for her. I thought she was taking a break anyways? I could withdraw it. 22:22, 04 17, 2012

Ha, I was planning to do it when I came back, but I'm not all that bothered. Have it if you want it. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Also, add a stripe running down the back, just like the tail has one, and (if you want), can you move the first part of the stripe under the chin up, an connect it to the eye? 23:37, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

When was she described as this? (just asking) And if you want her to have a paler chest, extend it at a top more. 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait, never mind. xD  15:26, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:31, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make this a lot brighter- she was described as pale gray. XD 02:49, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added stripe, defined shading, lightened it...and I'll fix the chest and earpink now. 10:09, 04 18, 2012

Make the stripe going down her back look less like shading. 18:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs to be much paler  18:17, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:48, 04 18, 2012

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 22:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes curve with the body more. 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the right front leg not have any stripes on it...? 10:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes a bit? 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly and lower the opacity on it a bit. 11:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redone...not much to say. :3 Comments? 15:20, 04 22, 2012

This is just an opinion, but even thought we've approved images with this kind of tabby style, it looks more like mottled fur effects to me. Though, it might help if the stripes all didn't point in the direction of her tail  15:34, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 19:15, 04 22, 2012

Jaggedtooth (W) ~ Tweaked
I feel bad about redoing this one ;.; *slaps self* I tried tweaking it but it was x.x If Leafstorm wants to tweak it, she is more than welcome to. Comments? 23:13 Wed Apr 18

I know this is going to sound rude, but can you at least try and make it look like the other style? If you don't want to, I understand why. After all, redone images are artist's choice...

Could you just tweak him like Breeze pelt whisker did? I know it'll be better for Leaf-storm, since everyone hates seeing their images redone. We don't have to redo this one if we're just changing the colour. 22:51, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I could never seem to get the brown right, withdrawing.

I'll take over. 19:30, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also defined the shading, if nobody minds, it was hard to see when brown. 20:43, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, hey he isnt ginger cat? Hmm I feel that Im going far and far away from the project and doenst checking whats new..hmm I think the stripes should be a little more visible, but its your choice. 20:46, April 21,2012 (UTC)

The eyes should be oranger. XD And Leaf-Storm, he's being made brown because there was no proof the ginger cat was him. C: Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:32, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the shading since that's what might have made the stripes hard to see. And I changed the eye color. Copper colored eyes~ 22:45, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (A) ~ Redone
I redid it to match the leader... but I lost the xcf file to the leader. DX Oh dang. Well, I think I managed to recreate it pretty well. I might have to up the red balance. Comments? 18:39, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the earpink in the ear farthest away from us. 18:53, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, the leader is slightly darker and redder. 68.103.240.28 03:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:29, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more pink-ish. 10:18, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

It matches the leader. :/ This is a normal colour for a ginger cat. 16:58, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink farthest away from us. 20:21, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, I have no clue what you're talking about here. It's nothing but defined. There's an entire line between it and the back of the ear. Could you elaborate please? 20:37, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

It must be my browser then. To me, it looks kind of white. :/ 20:38, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

That's the lighting. I can tone the lighting down there a bit, but I have the lighting angle set up to hit that ear head on. 20:45, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Q) - Redone
Wheeeee floofy. Shading and white was blotchy. OAs were MosspathofSkyClan, with a tweak by Scarlet. No I can't lighten the white anymore. Comments? 01:12, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Nice! Make the neck shading a little less flat? c: 01:52, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the flank shading please :3 Lovely  11:02, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

I hate saying no to more than one thing, but I can't make the neck shading less flat as it's completely in the shadows cause of the light source, and i prefer dark shading so I'd rather not lighten the flank. Sorry. 14:25, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay...o3o Darken all the shading just a bit. 21:51, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lakeshine (Q) ~ Redone
Comments? 02:04 Fri Apr 20

Purdy kitteh! Lighten/brighten the ear-pink and fill in the white pixel on her left forepaw *hope my eyes aren't spazzing*. 02:46, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

It looks tinted brown just a bit, can you fix that? (sorry if it's just my computer)  14:32, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a little brighter? 20:18, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye sir <33 The shading is supposed to be sorta dark magenta tinted. I'd kinda like to keep it that way :3 23:47 Fri Apr 20

This should match the warrior image. It was nominated to match each other, making a whole different style is pointless, just one image was needed to be redone to match the other. Whoever made the warrior image could be disappointed, since their image has to be redone, even though I think the image is perfectly fine. 00:31, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it should be redone, as both patterns looked unnatural, imho.

I know that it may look unrealistic, but...I really did like that image, and some people are just incapable of doing perfect styles in the first place. I think instead of doing overhauls, it's time to honor the OAs more by at least keeping the style. Because, art isn't something that's wrong, or bad, but something that proves the uniqueness of a person. You know what I mean? And maybe that complete overhauls aren't the right thing anymore. Maybe it upsets OAs...I mean no disrespect to anyone, really. Sorry for my rambling there...And this doesn't count just for this image, but others too. 14:37, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

No, no, no. You're completely right. (Well said, btw, and this is one of the many reasons we love you. XD) That right there won me over, and I'm for keeping the pattern on the warrior image. 8D

I'm confused, I change the pattern to the warrior? 14:55 Sat Apr 21

Yes. 23:22, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Guys, listen. I don't want anything started, but on the votes, there was a consensus to have both changed, and it's too late to take back the vote. I'm expecting to get the firing squad on this, but the warrior image doesn't look mottled to me, and at least the old queen did. Also, the warrior's shading makes the patches just look like it has extra dark areas instead of shading. Please don't kill me for this, it's just my two cents :S  00:37, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe heres what she could do, keep her pattern(Like for the mottles and stuff) but follow the patch style me(I worked on Lakeshine first, Atelda took over) and Atelda did. So that way, it looks like both images. Thats my suggestion. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:50, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. A) ~ Redone
Well, I thought...while he has this alt. The pale belly's a preference, I can remove it if you want. :3 Comments? 22:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:12, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

His ear should be torn. 21:57, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  23:00, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate it so it's more orange and less golden. 23:22, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (L) - Tweaked
Original artist was Wildfire, and the scars needed to be redone. Comments? 00:49, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading? -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  01:39, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll clear the waste on the next upload. 01:56, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the scars a bit where his fur would be thickest so they look more like scar fur? Specifically on his tail and chest. 02:19, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

You might add a bit more variation in color on the scars since there's so many of them. Not like different scars being different colors, but add like some darker in the middle of a few or something. Totally a personal preference, though, you don't have to do it. Breeze whisker  02:58, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice I forgot to crop the image so there would be no more waste. 15:22, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and chest. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:29, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:23, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Wing (Alt.PH) - Redone
OA was Rainwillow. Shading was flat, mud needed to be smudged, and it looked really flat. Comments? 03:16, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste between the paws. 16:29, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:57, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Pouncetail (W) - Redone
OA was either Bramble or Sandy with a redo by Splashy. Stripes needed to be defined, shading needed to be darkened, and the white on the head and neck didn't quick match the other images. 03:57, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the shading on the neck a little bit. 13:41, April 21, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded 00:58, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (L) - Tweaked
He needed to be battle-scarred. OA was Ibly. 16:24, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the scars just a tiny bit more. I think he was described with them during the battle, and a few of them would be rather fresh. 16:55, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:08, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) ~ Redone
Well, that was fun. :3 I picked his colors off of pictures of both dark ginger and pale ginger cats, so I'm pretty sure this is accurate colour-wise. And I gave him his daughter's eye. 8D Comments? 16:55, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink easier to see through the shading, please :3. 18:34, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat leg and tail shading a bit. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:27, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Round the shoulder shading a little bit. Breeze whisker  03:23, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Owl Feather SC ~ Tweaked
Well this was fun :3 I just added stripes. OA was Iceheart. I forgot to mention I only wanted the sharpclaw. Comments? 05:27 Sun Apr 22

Socks (KP) ~ Redone
Needed to match the loner. OA was MosspathofSkyClan. Comments? 12:19, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the eyes the same blue colour as the loner and define the earpink. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  13:18, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 14:43, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

The white muzzle still doesn't match the loner, make the white go up to his eyes, not his nose. 19:22, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Halftail (W) ~ Tweaked
I removed the patches, but the lineart looks a bit choppy, so I'll fix that later. 14:41, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

I would say that the lineart is the only thing that needs fixing. :3 You might as well go ahead with fixing that. 14:43, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded There, I think I fixed everything c:  16:13, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Patchpelt (W) - Redone
Redone for a bunch of reasons. I tried to keep it close to what the old one's markings were, but I could not find a black-and-white cat with a black face without the whole head being dark. So I didn't give him a black face. Comments? Breeze whisker  18:59, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Dove's Wing (TB) ~ Tweaked
OA was Bramble, with a tweak/redo by Rainwhisper, and a redo by me. Made it longhaired to go with Dovewing. Changes might not be showing...

Blur the neck/back shading a tad 19:38, April 22, 2012 (UTC)