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Brindleclaw (W) ~ Redone
Bleh. My first tortoiseshell. I wasn't sure what colors to use, so I copied them off of Sol, hope thats okay. xD Original artist was Sandstar12, and it needed to be longhaired. I know it looks horrible, so don't waste time telling me that. :P 22:38, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

If you took the colours from sol theres one to many in there, im guessing the dark orange, get rid of it, amd blur the patches some more. 22:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, does it matter what colors it is? The definition of tortoiseshell is a cat with 3 or more colors or something, and I think it just looks like more colors because of the shading. I'll blur the patches, but I think its fine with the colors. 22:51, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It just looks reallt busy to me with 4 colours. And smudge the face white some more. 22:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but then, cats can be many different colors. xD Re-Uploaded. 22:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white and the patches a little bit. 23:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, Misty. Can you redden the ear-pink a bit more? Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 00:28, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches. Pretty! 18:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Done. '''Well, it looks too busy with 4 colors, so I redid it with two. 21:54, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and its the second file, or the one with two colors. xD 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a lot like Petaldust! (not a bad thing) The flash of white on her chest is a little too pure white, darken it a tad bit. 16:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur the white flash on the chest and blur the tortoiseshell patches. 18:14, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''ITs so hard to put shading on torties! 22:24, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

YOU did this? This is amazing! Blur where the white meets the brown and black on the tail. 02:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Yes, I did this. xD 21:56, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the muzzle and chest patches slightly darker, they look sort of, bright and unnatural.Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 22:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thats nice. I already darkenened them a lot. The changes aren't showing, but I'll upload it again. Re-Uploaded. 22:27, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black a bit, at first glance it looks almost pure blac (though I know it's not) and there's some miscolored lineart, I think mostly on the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:05, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Seriously, its impossible to get through 48 hours without a comment. 21:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white parts a tad, and blur the shading on the ginger. 03:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything. 00:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

It may just be my comuter being funny, but it looks like there's miscolor lineart on the eye. Anybody else see it? (my screen's really wacky today, so I can't be sure). ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This has already gone through 2 days without comments, but Re-Uploaded. 22:31, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I just read through the approved Tweaks from here, and most of them say that after 24 hours, these should be archived, and since previously, after an upload, this passed through 2 days, this is done... 00:15, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Clawface (W) ~ Tweaked


Orginal artist was Snadstar12. Well, here he is....all I did was add some scars....I tred to make them match is rouge image. Idk if i did or not...but...comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:26, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Please fix the eye? 14:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar near the haunch looks too light at the bottom. 21:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

That is because i can't blur that part without blurring the lineart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just fix it afterwards or read a tutorial 22:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll move the scar over a bit...then I'll upload. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Moved the scar over, blurred the shading, and fixed the eye. What else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I've uploaded over to see if i could ger the changes to show. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-do the shading. 00:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks fine to me, just needs to be blured a bit. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  04:46, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did the shading and the highlights(Well, I brightened them a tad.) And blurred it to the max. Changes should be in the history. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:49, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make it look like the rogue image? ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, could you make the ends of the scars a bit pointier? With rounded ends, they kind of look like brush strokes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:54, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, I'll do it late, 'cause, Gimp isn't opening Clawface for some reason, nor is Pixril, so I'll see if I can work on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Gimp is working now, I'll get right on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-changes aren't showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy; fix that, and blur the shading more. 22:36, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (Q)~ Redone
Original artist was Sandstar12 and it needed to be long haired. I could not do a good tabby pattern to save my life, and i might just end up redoing the stripes. Comments? 20:26, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Add some of those small stripes in between the big ones on her hind foot. It looks out of place with the big gaps. And nonsense, I think you can do tabby markings just fine! 20:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy. Iceheart, you make excellent tabby patters! xP Curl the ends of the stripes by the eyes up to resemble eyelashes, they make her look kinda strict. xP Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 21:23, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Lol angry Silverstream >:|. 03:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Darken the nose color some so it doesn't blend with the pelt. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Round the tips of the M stripe on her forehead and blur the stripes on her belly and the Y stripe on her shoulder. This is beautiful, Iceheart! ;) Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 22:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:22, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and lighten the highlight on the chest. 22:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (L) - Tweaked
It's the second one on the history. Original artist was Bramble. It was agreed numerous times that his crooked jaw needed tweaked. Comments? 20:55, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great, Ivy! ;) Maybe jut his lower right part of his jaw down and open his mouth a bit more. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:25, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added some very dark red to his mouth so it wasn't all solid black. 01:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is totally epic! ;) Maybe add a line to show where his upper jaw is twisted up by his eyes? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is what you had envisioned. By the way, thanks! 16:11, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorta. I meant on the other side, but this works too. When I said draw a line, I kinda meant sharpening his uper jaw, sorta how Ruby and Socks were shown in the manga when they ran into Scourge. I hope that helps. If not, I could show you. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 22:02, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok, well I don't have the manga handy at this point, but I'll see if I can do that. If it doesn't look right next time, then you can show me what you mean. 14:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the jaw part near the tooth shorter, so that it doesn't stretch too far above the nose. 22:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:25, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ottersplash (W) - Redone
Original artist was Darkhallows, and she needed to be redone to match her description. 21:08, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, beautiful, Rainey! Blur the shading on his chest a bit more and maybe lighten it a tad. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:26, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make it a bit more ginger, it almost looks cream. 03:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous, Rainy. Can you make the line in the nicked ear just a bit thicker though? 07:08, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 01:31, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the head. 22:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 22:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Define and lighten the earpink, since its hard to see. 22:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (W) ~ Redone
Took all the colors from her warrior and apprentice chararts. Redone as a long-hair. Original artist was Bramble and was later tweaked by Goldenpaw and Stealthfire. Comments? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

It won't show me the image, but if I'm seing it right from the thumbnail, darken the tail shading some 21:22, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:31, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the back. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Shadewing/Sig}} 21:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Great job! Add some more stripes. 21:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 01:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the round stripes smaller and add more wiggly stripes? Too many big round stripes look unrealistic. 13:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Re-worked some of the stripes. You all know where to find the changes. xP <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:58, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the patches, lighten the highlight on the haunch and tail, and blur the head shading. 22:43, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Misty, the patches do have shading, except that there's a layer for shading on the patches themselves and a layer for the shading on the stripes. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. :D Lighten the haunch highlight a bit more. Ginger-and-white cat shading is hard, I know. xD 00:25, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) ~ Redone
Original artist was Darkhallows, I didn't know if you wanted me to copy the way he/shhe did it or not. I just copied the idea from the Elder image, so comments? Moo  nstr   ike  22:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this 'Loudbelly.warrior.png' Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:45, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:02, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried to change the name but my image won't appear, Darkhallows will when I try to post it. I blurred the highlights, not to much but tell me if you want more. Moo  nstr   ike  00:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty Moon! -- Toshiro  Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword! 16:20, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and make the eye look more realistic and add a pupil. 22:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (L) - Redone
I just redid it so he could match his other images. I actually really like this one. Took all the colors from the warrior image - original artist was Mumble789. Comments? 23:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are in history. 23:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

The nose color looks odd. Brown against brown. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

So we will be adding black muzzles to all of his images, right? Nice work, by the way. 00:01, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and thanks. Mintstar, well, I couldn't do pink...and neither could I do gray, so I went with brown. Unless you'd prefer green? :) 00:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Why couldn't you do gray? :D <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a scar on his muzzle 01:21, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

And a torn ear. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 01:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, he also needs scars in his pelt too. And pale amber eyes (if I remember right, yours are just amber) This is coming along nice, btw 01:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch/Smudge the black a bit further up his face and on either side too. Can you add a couple more stripes? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, the scars! Stupid me *facepalm* Mint, it looked really...odd against the brown coloring. The brown looks better. 13:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

YOU DID THIS? Woo~ Looks so freaking cool! Blur the black on the muzzle, please.

Could you make the leg shading have a lighter part, and blur the stripes just a bit? This is GREAT! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:29, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks so much guys :) There's a strip of brown near the ear - I've tried so hard to get it out, but it's stubborn. Tips or help, guys? 00:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken the stripes just a tad? They look a bit unnatural. Otherwise, great work! :) 00:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Break up the scars on his legs, it wouldn't be in a perfect line like that. 18:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add a scar across the bridge of his nose? --  Fr  os  t  e  d  A  p  p  l  e   22:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the ear. 22:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. I have to squint to see the muzzle. 23:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 23:28, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The scars look unnatural. Make them the same color as the scar from his old charart and less round on the ends. The one running up his tail looks especially odd, in my opinion. No offense. ^^; And I think you need to blur the muzzle a bit more and define the color of his nose so it doesn't blend in as much. 00:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. W) - Redone
This one has been bothering me for awhile. I was the original artist, and it was too ginger. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:58, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Change is in the history. I don't know how I added the one showing. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:01, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Darken the earpink a tad. :3 03:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I forgot to add that I borrowed everything but the eye color from Birchfall's alt. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:20, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much better, Mintstarr. Blur the ear pink a tad though. 21:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight bigger, and darken the shading. 22:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudstar (L) - Tweaked
Alright, here's Cloudstar. He needed darker shading, and I changed the earpink beacuse it was purply. Original artist was Sandy. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  15:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 15:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading needs to be blurred, and the haunch shading is blotchy, so fix that. 22:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewater (E) - Tweaked
Original artist was Icethroat, and I just darkened the shading. Changes are below the current version as usual. 20:11, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really dark. Lighten it up a lot. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:12, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. 22:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail and define the earpink. 22:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (Q) ~ Redone


She needed to be longhaired. Original artist was Icethroat21. The changes aren't shoiwng yet. And she looked more white than pale gray, so I'll either tweak it a bit later or just re-do it. :P 11:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cross that. I redid it again. :P Here's the link: Dawnflower -- 11:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad 18:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Looks awesome, Rainey! 22:50, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (Alt. H) - Redone
I wasn't sure if I was allowed to do this, but I found this image the other day (it wasn't on his page, even though it was approved), and I realized it needed some tweaking. It needed the mud removed and patchy fur. If this should be put up, I'm fine with it being declined, but I figured I'd try. Originally by Kittypet1. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Lighten the tail, and smudge the fur into the earpink of the left ear. ` 23:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

i thought he was dark brown. 23:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops, forgot to put that this was his Alt in the heading. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a white muzzle ;P Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hm. Is it me, or does it have a brownish tint to it..? -- 23:54, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I didn't add the white muzzle originally cause I wasn't sure if it was just a plain white muzzle, or one graying from age. If it was just plain, I don't think it would have been added to the alt. But anyways, I added it. And yes Blue, it did have a brownish tint to it. It was the shading, I don't normall just use black anymore fo the shading, it usually has a bit of color, and I think I over saturated this one's shading. XD I fixed it though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:02, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful Paleclaw! Darken the shading on the haunch, under the chin, and on the herbs. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:15, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The patchy fur on the shoulder looks a bit gray; pinken it a bit. 00:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)