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Feathertail- Redone


Hey Hawkfire here! I just got finished with her. (really sorry Shimmer!) I fixed her ear pink and her eye, and lightened the shading on her tail. I can't get the old pic of the oringinal Feathertail! I accidently uploaded it with the same name. Somebody help please. Hawkey  Ready for action 13:34, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

The ear needs to be blended more.--Stonestar 13:35, 30 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Something looks funky about the way it was blended- I mean from the original, not what you did. I'm not sure if it's because the lines got smudged in or they just had a weird shading style, but I think you should go over the shading a bit and then reblur it.Same for the tabby markings, they look a bit strange, so maybe if you went over them in the same color then blurred them again that would work. --♫ insaneular ♫ 15:09, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Very good, but I believe Feathertail should be long-haired. It's because a. she's RiverClan; they generally have thick fur and b. she was said to have a feathery/fluffy tail.  Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 17:57, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Insanular, umm...wow I am not sure I can do all of that. The tabby stripes look amazing and the shading is great to me. I will change her to a long hair, even tho I never imagined her that way. Silverstream is short hair, and she's from RiverClan. If I did have to change her to long-hair, I would have to redo the whole image. Do you really want me to do that? Hawkey  Ready for action 19:49, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

I could change her to a long-hair if you want, with oly minor edits..-- Darkhallows Lair 20:22, 30 August 2009 (UTC)


 * You wont exactly have to redo her all the way. The technique I use is past the image in paint and color the lineart white. Then take the lineart of the long hair and past it over, with white being transparent and you just have to remove the eye out of the other image. The only problem is you will have to add more coloring to the tail area and the chest.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 20:27, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Shady that would be very kind of you! Now all I have to do is mess with the ear pink. :)Thanks so much! Hawkey  Ready for action 21:46, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

You may need to work on the tail but here.-- Darkhallows Lair 07:04, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks so much! She's gorgeous! I will fix the shading on the tail and blend the ear pink, then she should be good to go!! Hawkey  Ready for action 23:23, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

It needs to be done soon, because this has surpassed Tweak Week and been up for more than a week. If it isn't worked on soon, I'll have to take it down. -- Bramble My Realm 01:33, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

In the transition between shorthair and longhair, it looks like some of the lineart on the stomach lost its double pixel, so it looks thinner than the rest. Fix that, the shading on the tail, and blend the ear pink, and it will look great. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 15:32, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Ooh sorry! I am working on her right now. Hawkey  Ready for action 20:22, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Okay how does this look? Hawkey  Ready for action 22:49, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There's a strip of light on the tail, and the whole body needs more shading. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:31, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Buzzardtail- For approval
Well, this is my first charart... Morningleaf Fox Cub Wolf Pup 15:37, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good for your first charart, I only see a few problems:


 * Add shading and blend it, making it look real
 * Blend the ear pink and make it darker, it looks fluro
 * Add highlights on the pelt

Hawkey  Ready for action 17:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I can't see any shading, add some and use the blur tool to make his pelt seem for 3-D. And blur the ear, make it not as bright. -- Peacesong Click Here To Go To........My Talk Page 18:14, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

They're right. Make the ear pink a triangle shape in the centre of the ear and blend a little. Despite what Hawke said above, don't add highlights until you've got the shading sussed as it'll make it more difficult and the image may not even need them. Get the shading and ear sorted and then see about highlights. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:23, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

OK. I'll fix that stuff. Morningleaf Fox Cub Wolf Pup 20:00, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can someone give me some tips on shading? I always get it too dark, and I don't know where to put it. Morningleaf Fox Cub Wolf Pup 20:11, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not really good at shading, either, but what I did was get the smudge tool, set the brush size to about 3 or 5, and then just smudge from the outline. (I did this in Pixlr.) And then I blurred it together by clicking on the blur tool and setting it to about 3-5. As I said, I'm not really sure about the best shading tips, but maybe that can help a little bit. Also, I noticed a couple of other things.

Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 00:11, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * The right ear is just a little bit darker than the rest of his fur.
 * Try blending the ear pink some more. The ear pink it really standing out right now.

Thanks! I'll go fix that stuff. Morningleaf Fox Cub Wolf Pup 00:53, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay. Anything else? Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 00:21, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

I think the shading is on the back, the hind leg, and where the tail connects to his body. And the back ear should be darker as well. -- Rain whisker 09 18:16, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I tried to get it similar to some of the approved images, but it doesn't look quite right to me.... :( <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 19:28, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading into the pelt. -- Rain whisker 09 20:07, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

It needs a lot more shading. I can tell you used some, but I can barely see it. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 20:13, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedOkay, I have made the shading darker, and blended it as much as I could. <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 23:55, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

You've now blurred the whole outline. Make the ear pink smaller, more central and a slightly paler colour. There is a smudge of lineart above her nose. Unblur the outline and then make the shading thicker and blend it (without touching the lineart) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:25, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the ear, and tried to fix the shading, but I still can't get it right :( <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 16:02, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry Morningleaf! You'll get it eventually - it takes most people a few tries. You've got the ear pink sorted now, which is good. On the shading, it's now the right darkness and thickness, just a little blotchy. You need to keep it as one clean consistent ine. Then blend the inside edges carefully so they start to run into the rest of the colour. Do not use the smudge tool though as this will make it streaky. Also, you need to remove the shading a little from the muzzle and a coupe of other places. At the moment you have shading following the whole lineart. Just choose the direction of your light source and then think about where the shadows would fall and put your shading there. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:15, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Try blending the shading with the blur tool; in pixlr, the blur tool is the one that looks like a rain drop, and when you hold the mouse over it, I think it says "Blur Tool", but I can't remember...but that should blend it. I highly reccomend putting the brush size at about 3-7 (square), and keeping the strength at 100.


 * If you accidentally hit the lineart inside the picture, make sure to color back in the lineart pixels by putting the pencil brush at size 1 (circle or square, doesn't matter), and put the color to black. Then, just color where the lineart is blurred, and the lineart should return.
 * If you accidentally blurred/smudged it outside of the picture, then just put the eraser at 1 and erase the spots outside of the lineart.

I hope this can help some! And don't worry, you'll get the hang of it eventually! It just takes time and practice. :) Icethroat21 Enter at risk 18:37, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention this: there is so much shading on the front leg, that I can barely see its actual color. Try using less shading there. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 18:40, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat. Also, you need to blend the shading. Last, there are like, little spots in between the shading. you need to get rid of that.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:42, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I really agree with Swallowtip, the need to be removed, you probably made the spots because you first shaded it, then added some more shading in some parts, so the shading is darker where the spots are. Remove the spots, blend the shading. -- Pan das ong <font color="white" style="background:silver">Proud Owner of a Imaginary Panda! 00:04, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'll work on it later today. I am very busy with school right now, so please don't decline this. <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 12:14, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Stripes- For Approval
Heres my first rogue! It took forever to do the stripes! Comments? Hawkey  Ready for action 17:17, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Hawkfire, this is beautiful! The only things I can see are: 1. the ear pink is too light and needs to be blurred 2. the shading needs to be darker and look more like shading; right now it just looks like blobs of darker color. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 17:34, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M)- I love the pattern of your stripes! Just do what Sparrowsong suggested and it should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:14, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Darkened shading and ear pink Hawkey  Ready for action 00:31, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

The shading should be blurred into the pelt a little more.-- Darkhallows My den 04:48, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ugh, I tried but whenever I try to blur the shading, it messes up the stripes. I may just have to withdraw this if I don't figure out something Hawkey  Ready for action 20:22, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the back is too much, try bluring it! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 22:59, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

My only suggestion would be to lighten the shading so it doesn't look so dark compared to the pelt. But then the shading wouldn't be there so... -- Rain whisker 09 12:08, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I know I don't have the power but WORK ON THIS! IT'S GOING TO BE DECLINED SOON!<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:43, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

It still has two days Swallowtip. Also, please try and avoid caps- it's ike your shouting. Use italics for emphasis. or bold. Hawkey: Just lighten the back shading a little more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:26, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Ooops, my bad. Sorry hawky, this is very good and I didn't mean to shout. My laptops bugging up, I though I was outting it out of caps.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 15:56, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Swallowtip: That's why they make the preview button before you click save page. Hawkfire: To lighten the shading, but not mess up the stripes, try using the dodge tool. Otherwise, it looks very good. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 16:38, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfur - For Approval


Here's Brackenfur, my second-favorite warrior (Tawnypelt is my #1 fave). Hopefully it's better than my first Brackenfur, which looked like a possessed chihuahua. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 18:45, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I broke out laughing when I read your comment about the possessed chihuahua. This is good! Just make it so your ear pink isn't touching the bottem of the ear, and see if you can blend it more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:49, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks very nice! Just blend the shading a little more! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;aqua; background:silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Peacesong Click Here To Go To........My Talk Page 18:51, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the shading and the ear pink. Is it better now? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 18:57, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The transition between shading and regular pelt is still too hard. Blend until you can't see a line separating them. The two tabby stripes coming out from his chest, separate them a little bit, it looks likes one big awkward stripe. -- Bramble My Realm 21:26, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 01:06, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

...Any comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 20:46, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

If you could get rid of the mark just below his eye, it would be better. It looks crowded in that area. Also, on the back, there is a strip of light just after the shading and against the lineart. -- Bramble My Realm 21:23, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I've fixed the eye mark...I don't know what you mean by 'strip of light.' Would you mind circling it or something? Thanks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 02:41, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

You need to extend the shading right up to the lineart on the back - basically, you've missed a spot right next to the lineart. I don't think a diagram is realy necessary to explain this. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:40, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I think I've fixed it now. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 17:52, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Now you've blurred the lineart there a bit Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:30, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Un-blurred the lineart. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 22:27, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else that I need to fix? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 01:38, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

you should change the eye, try and use technique that the other warriors (erm...see Oakheart) have.--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 02:19, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the eye. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 03:39, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great, but I thought Brackenfur had amber eyes. I don't know where it said his eye color was, but I thought it was amber... Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:54, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think it ever mentioned his eye color, Ice. I imagined him with blue eyes (like Honeyfern and Poppyfrost), but we can't really be sure... <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 17:19, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

That's okay, you have a fine point. I think it's okay if his eyes stay blue. I was just thinking that Honeyfern and Poppyfrost got their blue eyes down the bloodline from Frostfur. I imagined him with amber eyes, because lots of the golden and brown tabbies we have seen so far have all had amber eyes. But I think that blue eyes will be fine. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 18:50, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Alright then. Anything need to be fixed? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 04:33, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. Then he's good to go. -- Bramble My Realm 21:14, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Is it any better now? I centered the pink and also darkened it a little because I thought it was too light. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 21:27, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. What do you think senior warriors?<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:44, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I wish I was a senior warrior so I could say the magic words... He's awesome. :) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:47, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks :). He sure is a lot better than my other Brackenfur...*shudders* <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 01:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Dito Mumble.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:48, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

lol sorry. Busyness ^_^ comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:29, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

All I would say is the part on the upper back, theres 3 consecutive tabby markings. They look really close together, maybe take out the middle. And on the tail one of the markins goes out of the lineart. <span style="color: Black; font-family:Comic Sans MS; background:Blue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black;">Mossflight 22:02, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Better? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 22:20, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

The only thing I see is a slight bit of coloring near the middle of his tail that goes out of the lines. Other than that, it's wonderful. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:46, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Better? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 16:50, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:59, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Hazelstar- For Approval
I'm on a leader spree! Three leaders in a row. XD Lol. Anyway, here's Hazelstar. Originally, he was Redstar, but, then I figured out Redstar was already reserved, so, I lightened him up, and turned him into Hazelstar! Comments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:44, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Very good. Just blur the shading transition some more. -- Bramble My Realm 21:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Err... is there supposed to be color under his hind leg? -- Rain whisker 09 23:36, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blend all of the shading a whole lot.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 18:00, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, blend the edges a little more and make the ear pink slightly smaller so it doesn't fill the whole ear. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:38, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Or, does he need to be blended more? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:49, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

This is better and yes he does need more bending. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:49, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week Honeyfur. Please work on this or it will be declined. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 09:47, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Sandy! My teachers have been giving me loads of homework, lately, so I've been using most of my time to keep up with my schoolwork. Anyway, I tried to blend the shading a bit more. I used the blur tool, but it's kind of weak on Pixlr. Is there any other tool that may work on shading? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 16:11, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

For a lot of shading, you can use the smudge tool, and then blur it, but it doesn't have as great of a quality as the blur tool does. If the blur tool is too weak, just blur the same spots over and over again until it's blended enough. For the actual picture, the shading transition on the hind leg needs blurred some more. Otherwise, this looks great. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 16:45, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Seriously, don't worry about it Honeyfur. Schoolwork is bogging me down at the moment too. The blending actually looks fine now, in my opinion. I'd try darkening the shading a bit though as it doesn't really stand out. Also, I know highlights aren't mandatory but sometimes they really enhance an image and they seem to look especially good on the leader images. Try looking at Quiet's Dawnstar (I think it was Dawnstar anyway) and some of the approved leaders and maybe add a small highlight on the chest and perhaps the hindleg too just to add depth to the image. It's looking realy good though. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:45, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Spottedleaf-For Approval
This is Spottedleaf!!Please tell me how to make her better!!<span style="color:Orange;background:Blue;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Shim-Shim ★ 22:05, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I like this alot! :D Just darken the shading on the bottem of the herbs a bit more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:14, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The one thing that's realy bothering me is her tail - it looks striped. :\ -- Quiet !...

She looks to... blurry. -- Darkhallows Lair 04:19, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Her tail is suppose to be a brown TABBY tail.<span style="color:Orange;background:Blue;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Shim-Shim ★ 17:20, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darn it, her description is WAY too long for me to remember correctly. >w< -- Quiet !... 19:51, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think her tail is supposed to be white tipped. I agree her description is rather complacated. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 01:56, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

where does it say that she has a white tipped tail?<span style="color:Orange;background:Blue;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Shim-Shim ★ 17:05, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

My bad. You were right, it's black tipped. By the way I love the image. I see nothing wrong. Hope it gets approved. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 18:02, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

She's like my favourite character!!nice job!!!<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;orange; background:gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">ღ Şũήמy ღ 18:10, September 13, 2009 (UTC)


 * Love the image, but I do think you blurred her alot and with the shading you could lighten it up some on the paws. They so close to gray, that they should atleast give some closeness to white. On her back I can't really tell if you gave her any shading at all.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 21:49, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Shimmer, you haven't worked on this in almost 2 weeks. Please work on her soon or she'll have to be declined. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:58, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Loner Blanks - For Approval


(M) - I did more of a Melonlemon-style with these blanks and I'm pretty happy with the way they turned out. I also made an example (The shading might be in the wrong places though.)



Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:13, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

These are great! Give the muzzle a bit more of a stop and the ears look weird... but I really like them. - Darkhallows Lair 22:45, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

this looks really good Mosswhisker! but since they're loners ,wouldn't the fur be a bit scruffier?--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Turquoise; background:Black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Turquoise;"> ☆Darkkeh☆ uh...hi 22:46, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

For some reason the head looks a bit small to me... but they look great otherwise! -- Rain whisker 09 23:35, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, Mosswhisker... you're amazing at making blanks! There are only a few things that I can say about these. Firstly, the neck looks a bit too thin, almost pinched, maybe you could make it a bit thicker. Also, I think there should be a bit more definition between the neck and the foreleg, it looks a little too smooth to me. These are incredible, though! <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:39, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks guys! I'll change them tomorrow, after school. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 00:03, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Okay! I changed the muzzles so they have a stop, fixed the foreleg, and fixed the neck. (All I did was shorten it, and I think that helped.) I also didn't know what was wrong with the ears, but I did make them less pointy. I didn't change the fur because it's pretty scruffy as it is, and Loners wouldn't be a scruffy as Roughes. I didn't change the head size becuase when I inceased in by a mear 2 pixles, it looked waaay to big. I also got rid of the gray lines on the longhaireds. What else do I need to fix? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:35, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

The ears look a little small. Can you make them a bit bigger? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:19, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

The toes on their paws look a little weird... could you change them? -- Rain whisker 09 20:22, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Changed the toes and (even though it's hard to see) widened the ears. I also changed the shape of two of the paws a bit. Better? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:55, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

I think there great. I just think that the eyes are a little small. Other then that I hope they get approved before long. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:05, September 13, 2009 (UTC)


 * I don't know..the eyebrows look awkward?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:49, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I think the whiskers are a little short. But they're great otherwise! -- Rain whisker 09 12:05, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I'll fix these tomorrow. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:55, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I have a few things - Don't get me wrong - i think that these are good, and I know that you've put a lot of effort into them. I'm just trying to help. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 06:54, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
 * The legs are all different lengths. Tey get longer and longer towards the right of the image. The front paw which is bent in the action of walking should be shorter than the others, (because it is bent and therefore not at it's full length) but at the mkoment it is too long.
 * The body is slanted downwards (towards the front of the cat) This may look okay as you finish up the image without being adjusted, but you can have a go at making it more evn if you want to.
 * The ears looks to thin. Don't change the height right now, but have a look at the ears. Also, the back one should probably be on the other side. maybe just fiddle around a bit.
 * The muzzle - it just looks weird to me, no offense. Lots of it is out of proportion and place just within that small space. Open up an approved blank and these, and carefully chck the face, moving around the pixels until they look similar-ish.

(M) - I fixed zeh whiskers. I didn't change the eyes because I couldn't get them to look right, and I don't know what you mean by "eyebrows".
 * Thanks Dawn! I'll fix those things tomorrow. (I'm suffering from chronic lazyness right now.) Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire  21:52, September 15, 2009 (UTC)


 * Lol, sorry Moss. I thought the whiskers were eyes, and the eyes were eyebrows.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 13:46, September 16, 2009 (UTC)


 * I think the whiskers should be a bit far apart. That's why they looked like eyes to me. (no offense)–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:28, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I fixed the paws and the ears. I'll fix the rest soon. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:12, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like their far rear leg goes through the pelt.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:48, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I was thinking the same thing, but I didn't know how to word it, so thank you, Swallowtip. ;) Otherwise, these look great!  Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:19, September 18, 2009 (UTC)


 * The hind legs are kind of overlapping, if you know what I mean...–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:11, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I fixed the legs and the whiskers. I can't get the muzzles to look right Dawn; could you maybe make me a diagram? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:05, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - What else do I need to fix besides the muzzles? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:04, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Birchstar (RC)for approval
My first leader and my first tabby. Comments? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:42, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Here are a few things: It mostly just needs shading. The ear pink looks fine, and so does most of the tabby stripes. Otherwise, I think it looks good. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:16, September 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * Needs shading. If it's there, I can't see it.
 * The nose pink is too bright, it's more of a hot pink rather than just a pink. Try to lighten it some. But from the pictures I was looking at on Google images, brown cats tend to have either brown or black noses, depending on whether they're multi-colored. Try changing it to just a lighter shade of brown from the color of the fur.

The tabby stipes need to be longer in most cases and more varied. Add shading and blend it well. Lighten the nose pink. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:34, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image. Made the tabby stripes longer, fixed nose and ear pink, and added shading. Is there anything else? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:40, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Still needs thicker and darker shading. Then blend it for natural transitions. As for the stripes - make them less regular. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:36, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

What do you meen by regular?--<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:27, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

um... regular. i'll try and think of another way to describe it lol. bear with me. Make the different lengths, shapes and sizes. That would make them less regular. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:29, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Made the tabby stripes longer and darker. Added more shading. I really don't know what to think of it. Is it better? Worse? --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:54, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the tabby stripes a bit more.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:39, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Also, more shading is needed. Thicken it slightly and then blend. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 15:04, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I'll get to her as soon as I can. My life has been busy since school started, so I'll try to get to her during the weekend. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 16:14, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Thickened the shading and the tabby stripes. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 19:33, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Frostfur (Warrior Version)- Up For Approval


Here's Frostfur the worst white cat i've ever seen it needs improvements. --Stonestar 14:13, September 12, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

It's actually not bad right now :). Just blur the shading, lighten the eye slightly, make the ear pink stand out more, and it should be good. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 16:44, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Thax i'll fix that!Stonestar 17:15, September 12, 2009 (UTC)<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:Orange; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:black;"> Stonestar How's Prey Running? |undefined

The legs look way too blurred. -- Rain whisker 09 12:13, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:56, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Socks ~ (Kit) For Approval


Yayzers! My first kit! I gave him an orange collar because I felt like it. *shrugs* Suggestions? -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:59, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

This is really sweet :) I like the orange collar lol. As for suggestions: Make the ear pink smaller Runningkit is a good example of size and colour. Add some shading on the head and under the collar and thicken it slightly on the sides. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 15:56, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sandy! : ) Ok, I'll get on that once I finish Scourge's improvments. : ) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:17, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 01:19, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I believe Sandy meant to thicken the ‘’shading’’ on both sides, not the collar lineart. That looks strange now. Other than that, it’s ready. -- Bramble My Realm 21:11, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

xD Your right! Stupid me! I'll fix it. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:41, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderpaw - for approval
I'm not sure about the paw...Minnowclaw 01:18, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think the paw looks great! So does the shading and everything! Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:21, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

The paw looks awesome! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:white; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:black;"> Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 01:54, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Can you add a highlight to the herbs as a final touch? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:48, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Wow, I didn't think the paw was good at all.Minnowclaw 17:21, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The bent paw needs thickened lineart, and it's bend is too sharp. Round that out, and then she'll be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:58, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

It's supposed to be her hind leg that's bent. I have a book reference on her article talk page. The warrior version is wrong too. -- Rain whisker 09 12:01, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Blackclaw is right. I also came across a reference when rereading one of the books. It is her hind leg. Bramble - what shall we do about her warrior version?? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:31, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... someone willl just have to change it, as mal hasn't been seen in the last milennia. Any calls for you could do it? I will, if no one else wants to. -- Bramble My Realm 21:36, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

I will do her medicine cat version. I just erased the leg because I couldn't get it right and it wouldn't show up on the other side in real life.Minnowclaw 22:14, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

She is a dark gray. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 23:53, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

better?Minnowclaw 16:58, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Darker than that - it needs to look like her medicine cat version. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:56, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Molepelt (MC) For Approval


My first image. Criticism welcome. Also, I'm not going to be on much these days, so please do not decline this.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 11:53, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is to big, and maybe to dark fur? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 12:07, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

yES LIGHTEN THE FUR TO MAKE TO MAKE THE EYE STAND OUT (Oops caps)--Stonestar 14:37, September 13, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Lighten the herbs and perhaps make them more of a green colour - I'm not sure a medicine cats is likely to use withered plants... Lighten the fur a little and make sure to add a pupil and highlight into the eye. Look at some approved images for reference. The ineart is blurred and there is colour outside of it in places. When you've sorted that, then we'll talk shading. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:47, September 13, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. Any better? I tried adding the pupil, but I don't know if it's right.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 06:21, September 14, 2009 (UTC)


 * I think this is a lot more good, I can see the whiskers now :) I'm not sure but I think the eye colour sould be more big? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:43, September 14, 2009 (UTC)


 * Meaning?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:45, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I've not done a medcat, so I'm not sure if the eye can be biger or not :/ but I mean I can't see the pupil but maybe if you did more colour in the eye you could make the pupil biger, (sorry I'm so bad at spelling) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:06, September 14, 2009 (UTC)


 * Ah, wait a bit.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:13, September 14, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. Anything else? Sandy, how much shading is needed?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:41, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

perhaps make the eye colour brighter--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 04:00, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Needs a highlight in the eye. Just put a white pixel on the left side of the pupil. -- Rain whisker  12:14, September 16, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. Any better?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 13:47, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading a lot more, and also, look at Brambleclaw's deputy charart, for example, to see how the eye needs to be done. Otherwise, it looks good. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 22:20, September 16, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:35, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thin the shading out a bit and make sure it extends all the way down his back. Also, can you use the dodge tool (um... the one that looks like a circle on a stick) to add a highlight to the top of the herbs. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:03, September 17, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. What else? Impatience is the new life,(lol) so how much time does it take for an average image to be approved? I've uploaded this around 10 times. Do not take this statement very seriously.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

'Patience is a virtue' - I forget who said that. It takes as long as it takes. That's better but now to the same with the other shading on the chest and hindleg curve and then blend! blend! blend! Careful not to smudge the lineart. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:32, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Brook (w) - For Approval
This image has been sitting on my computer for a month and I think its time I get it out to the world ^_^ I've been so super busy I'm seriously going to have to stick with one image at a time for now. So what do you guys think of Brook (Brook Where Small Fish Swim) as a warrior of ThunderClan is?-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 21:43, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! She is so beautiful! The image looks really good, maybe you could make the ear pink a little brighter? Just by a little bit! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 21:46, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

This is gorgeous! Only thing, ear pink, brighten and blend it a little more. And I always pictured Brook as a striped tabby, not a classic tabby. Are you sure? Hawkey  Ready for action 21:59, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I think classic is fine. Blur your shading transition a bit more too. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:17, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! Fantastic! This is marvelous! I think the classic tabby is fine, and very pretty. :) Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:14, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I think that you need to blend everything more (excluding the line art, of course!) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 06:57, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Lighten your tabby markings a shade or two too. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:22, September 15, 2009 (UTC)


 * Whew...finally able to get on and update this picture. Here we are with the shading transition blended and ear. I tired the whole lighten the tabby marking but it came up as some ugly brown that didn't go with the fur color at all.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 22:49, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Well, it looks good to be. Comments before approval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:57, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Flick (R) - For Approval


Okay, my first charart, please don't decline this too quickly because I will not be on on weekdays, well, I might be on a little while, so I will only be able to edit the image sometimes. Not much to say about the image! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 22:45, September 13, 2009 (UTC

This looks fine, but the lineart is blurred. Also, try blurring the ear pink some more. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:15, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'll have to do that on Saturday, next Saturday, I can't do it on Weekdays. -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:55, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 22:49, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing for your first image, Peacesong! (Do you want me to keep calling you that or should I call you Pandasong?) Just get rid of the grey pixel on his leg and it should be good. I can circle the grey pixel if you want... <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 00:17, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! You can call me whatever you want, Peace, Peacesong, Panda, Pandasong, anything works! :) And if you could circle the grey pixel, that'd be great! ^_^ -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:44, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, I edited a few things, anything else that needs changing? -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:51, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

He still has the grey pixel. I've circled it for you. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined

OKay, thanks! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:56, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:59, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

There are a few bits of blurred line art on his back leg. Other than that, he should be approved soon. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 09:06, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

I will fix that after school today then. -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 11:50, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Could you circle the blurred line art for me? Thanks if you could! -- Pandasong <font color="white" style="background:lightblue">I ♥ Pandas 20:05, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

I'll circle it for you. I should get it done soon. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 20:24, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, here's what needs fixed. The red circles are for blurred lineart, the blue circle is where the lineart is almost gone and needs more black pixels, and the yellow circle is for where there is a gray pixel that needs to be black. I hope this helps some. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 20:38, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks so much! This will help a lot! -- Pandasong <font color="white" style="background:lightblue">I ♥ Pandas 21:37, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed some of that, what else needs fixing? -- Pandasong <font color="white" style="background:lightblue">I ♥ Pandas 21:53, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

he's great! but I see a small line on his tail--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 23:58, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Could you circle the line for me? So sorry that I'm asking everyone to circle the problems for me, but I want to fix the exact thing so I won't miss any problems. -- Pan das ong <font color="white" style="background:lightblue">I ♥ Pandas 00:13, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

it's small...I know--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 02:12, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, its okay if its small, I want to fix any problems there are! :P -- Pan das ong <font color="white" style="background:silver">Call Me Panda! 20:16, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Blur your highlights and shading a lot, taking care not to hit the lineart. Then I’d call him good to go. -- Bramble My Realm 21:11, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I'll do that tonight then! -- Pan das ong <font color="white" style="background:silver">Call Me Panda! 22:07, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! I would go with Bramble, the highlights and shading need more blending. And the belly shading: there are some spots that haven't had shading go over it. I'm lucky to be your mentor :). <span style="color: Black; font-family:Comic Sans MS; background:Blue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black;">Mossflight  22:33, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Mossflight! I will do that after I help my little sister with her homework! (Means I will do it tonight!) -- Pan das ong <font color="white" style="background:silver">Call Me Panda! 22:36, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I'm so sorry I didn't reupload it yet! I'm just really busy these days, really sorry, I just had Chinese School today, I will try hard to reupload it on Sunday! Really sorry! -- Pan das ong <font color="white" style="background:silver">Proud Owner of a Imaginary Panda! 02:30, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Dappletail(w)-for approval
Here she is, IDK if I like this one, but it's better than Foxheart xD.-- Darkhallows My den 08:48, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

The ginger looks too yellow and the black looks grey. Other than that, I'd say she's pretty good. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 21:21, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any shading. :C Other than that, and what Sparrowsong said, she is absoulutely marvoulous. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 06:58, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Silverstream (W) - For Approval


My first classic tabby. I tried my best to make her look like her queen version. Anyway, does she look good? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 21:13, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

The color and stripes look fine. Things that bother me: The eye, it needs another black pixel, and the ear pink, too dark and on the top of the ear. Hawkey  Ready for action 22:11, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Better? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 23:09, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Use this as a reference for the eye. -- Bramble My Realm 21:11, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, is this better? I'm pretty satisfied with the way it looks now, personally. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 21:27, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the eye looks much better. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 16:27, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Jaypaw - for approval
I'm so fed up with the other type of tabby stripes! I tried this one, is it good?.Minnowclaw 23:31, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I love this. He is supposed to be just grey, though, and this is more like light grey/silver. I'd change him to darkish grey. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 03:31, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

better?Minnowclaw 16:42, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, he looks better now that he's darker, but what happened to the tabby stripes? Icethroat21 Enter at risk 17:29, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I thought that he wasn't tabby?Minnowclaw 19:02, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - His page description is a small gray tabby tom. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:01, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Rowanstar - for approval
*Makes note to lay of patched cats*<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:39, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Add some more shading, blur it and add some highlights too if you already haven't! Otherwise, it looks.........alright. -- Pan das ong <font color="white" style="background:silver">Proud Owner of a Imaginary Panda! 00:21, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

He Looks awesome. All I can see is maybe add some highlights? -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:43, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

HIGHLIGHTS AREN'T MANDATORY! Pandasong, the shading is blended to the best of my ability.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:34, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Highlights are not necessary, that is true. A shaded cat without highlights is both simple and approvable. Swallow, you just need to blend the transition between your patches, darken the ear pink and make it less smudgy, and that's about it. He looks very nice. -- Bramble My Realm 02:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just take the patch on his chest and connect it with the other brown patch on his leg; it looks a little unatural right now. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:06, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded made the ear pink darker and redder, connected the patches and blended to the best of my ability without it looking smudged.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 16:01, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - It looks great! Just add shading to the bottem of his tail and this should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:55, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Breezepelt (A) - For Approval
After getting my first image approved, I wanted to try an apprentice and a kit, so, well, here's Breezepaw. How does he look? Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:43, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

If you want to be fussy, he needs a bit of soft shading under his chin. Other than that, he's amazing! You are very talented. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 05:05, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did I get enough shading under the chin? Icethroat21 Enter at risk 16:21, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Looks good to me. Any comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:54, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (Ki) - For Approval
Not much to say about this one, but I need more shading, don't I? Does it need to be darker? Icethroat21 Enter at risk 00:55, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing! You're very talented. Now, the only thing I can see is that she needs a shadow under her chin. Look at some of the approved kits - Briarkit, Mosskit, and Ruby are a few good examples. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 01:45, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, how does it look, now that I added the shadow under her chin? Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:02, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

You're an extremely talented artist. 24 hours starting now. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:40, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Kestrelpaw(MCA) - For Approval
I just knew he was going to be Kestrelflight! I just knew it! Also, his description said a gray brown tom with white splotches, so I tried to make his base colour both gray and brown at once. Opinions/constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 05:09, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful. Let's see if anyone has any comments, and then I'll start the 24 hours. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:38, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think you'll get many fish on that hook. This is good, no, great, no I awesome! I think we should stat to 24 hours.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 16:34, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful! Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:52, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Storm Clouds at Dusk(PH) - For Approval
He is a prey hunter with the tribe, so I thought he deserved some acknowledgement for it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 05:32, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

There is a grey line at the bottom on the left that needs to be removed. Other than that, this looks great! One thing though: on the other prey hunters mud streaks have bene included - does he need them? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 15:02, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I thought that Stormfur was a cave guard. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 16:15, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I'm with spottedwing on this. I'll get outcast and dawn so I can check.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 16:32, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Spottedwing is right. In Outcast, during the scene that Jayfeather saw, Stormfur was teaching the other cave-guards fighting techniques. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 16:50, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I just read that too. Will this be declined becuase that would be a real pity.Minnowclaw 16:53, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

You're all right! Stupid me... I didn't even notice my mind was so full of other things. They're right Dawn; he was a cave-guard. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:50, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Wait. I found another prey hunter with a simalar discription. Storm Clouds at Dusk. I love this image and I think it's too good to be declined. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 19:25, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I'm with Spottedwing. What do you say dawn? Do you want to make this Storm Clouds at Dusk?Minnowclaw 21:42, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I probably will, but just quickly - he was teaching the cave guards, but that doesn't mean he was one of them. I thought that because he joined the Tribe to be with Brook and all of his time there before offically becomeing one of them had been spent with Brook, being trained in Prey-Hunter-ness, that he had become a prey hunter (if that makes any sense) I mean, we know he had training in hunting, but I never saw him getting training in Cave-guarding. If no-one agrees with me, I will change him though. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 00:38, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Actually - I have made some Cave-Guard blanks which I will put up at my next chance, so I'll just make this Storm Clouds at Dusk. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 04:12, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah - forgot about the line. Fixed the line, and by some random miracle, it finally let me make it transparent. So I made it transparent. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 04:16, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth - For Approval
My first charart in a while. This was originally supposed to be Lionblaze but I never had word from Mal to submit it during Tweak Week so I've searched long and hard for another cat it could be and found Jaggedtooth! Not my favourite cat but every one needs a charart. Consructments? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:20, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great Sandy! Maybe, (and this is just me searching for the tiniest bit in this awesome pic) you should make the ear pink pinker. If that makes any sense.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 16:31, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Should show up in a few minutes Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:09, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Nice to hear you still got to use your Lionblaze for something! This looks great. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:53, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

This is great! The ear pink is much better.Minnowclaw 21:44, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Birchfall(A) for approval


He's back!!!!!!!!!!!any thing to improve?--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 01:00, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading under the chin. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:39, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

His stripes are strangely thin and are all the same. Try changing some to make them less regular- add some 'y' shaped ones or some more curved ones and thicken them all. I use a size 9 paintbrush for tabby stripes and they seem to work quite well. Perhaps a size 5 for an apprentice; experiment a little. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:03, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Raggedstar (Le) - For Approval
I've done two versions of him with different tabby stripes. Which is best? Constructments? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:28, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

My mum thinks the one on the left, but I say the one on the right. They are both brilliant. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:43, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

I say the one on the right. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 14:31, September 20, 2009 (UTC)