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Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
RECLAIM! Anyways, just touched up little Quailie, and added a bit of criticism from the other Quailkit for approval. --

The white still needs to be dulled quite a bit. It's way too bright. Could you also smudge/smooth it out? 14:16, 11/27/2016

The colors on this need to match the other image. 15:49, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Like Waterclaw said, colors need to match, especially ear pink, eyes and pelt color. Sorry if this is repeating. Winterpaw:  I am  a  true Monster  22:40, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Colors no longer have to match, due to the other image being withdrawn. Could you smooth out the shading a bit? It abruptly cuts off, or so it seems, and it should be a bit smoother on the body and tail.

Re-uploaded TFW you leave your computer alone for a minute to get food and the next you almost upload a charart with a gun above it because your brother graffitied over your art --

Blur the chest shading a tad. It's a bit too sharp. 03:28, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Brightened the belly 'cause I noticed it was way too dull and I had trouble seeing it. --

Smooth out the shading a bit more in general. 21:36, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

I know you don't have to match the other image, but if this one has white on the bottom of the chest like the last one (I can't tell), then maybe lighten the shading on the white so we can see it better? If there isn't white there, then ignore this. :P Also, smooth out the shading on the shading on the tail, and have it follow the curve of the tail more, and not quite the sharp curve that it's on now that has the entire tip cast in shadow, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:29, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded it's actually the belly, not the bottom of the chest, Jayie. If I got my way, Quailkit would have a much bigger belly than he does RN, but other PCA'ers disagreed. I want a bigger area, sniffle sniffle. I also tried to do the tail as depicted in Sunjaw's guide, but it's long-haired, so I tried...? my best to do it as a shorthair. --

I think with this shading placement, there should be more shading at the top of the back. Can you add some there please? Also, smudge/blur the ear pink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:08, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload --

Nice^ Perhaps define the eye depth some.

Re-upped Re-upped? Is that a word? --

Add some shading to the top of the head? Also, I might nit picking here, but I think the shadings a little solid. Lighten/blur/smudge a little?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:07, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

I think it needs to be darkened a bit, seems too light. TawnyBracken (talk) 18:40, December 16, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

i think the shading could use a little more depth to it maybe? 16:42, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me how I could increase the depth with a depth layer, please? --

Archeye (Star) - CBA
Questions: Since my first image was approved, do I still need to put "for evaulation", and second, I wasn't sure if I should add the patchy pelt or not, but I did anyway just to be safe. And I decided to try something harder...ha...what a great idea... 01:21, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

First image was approved, so this'll be 'For Approval' instead.

Great job^ Super tiny thing, but to match the other image, add a tiny bit of pink on the tail tuft of fur.

'''Reups. '''Thanks! 19:01, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Can you smudge/blur the ear pink a little? Also, with the tail tuft of fur, can you make it two pixels thick where it sticks outside the original lineart?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:13, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reups The pixel expansion was a pain, but I think I did it justice? 04:02, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reups  Got rid of some waste and fixed the tail pixel 20:03, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the pink parts near the tufts a little? Especially on the tail.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:18, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 00:33, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes; you're matching the elder for this pattern, and those stripes aren't as blurred.

Reups I have now learned to save a layer of stripes before blurring them. 18:20, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Filou (Ki) ~ For Approval
15:33, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Shoot, I forgot to blur/smudge the stripes. I'll fix that later. 15:38, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Awesome!! Perhaps fill in the nose? - Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  18:26, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Great job as always. Define the earpink; I can't even see it. 03:54, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 17:31, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Little bits of orange are poking out around the image. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  22:02, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

can you make the paws a little bit brighter? 16:40, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 17:09, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) - For Evaluation
Alright, my second attempt for a Charart. I saw another image named this...was that declined? Probably, because it wasn't on his page. Anyways, I hope this looks good. 06:50, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

The other one was withdrawn. Define the shading and make the earpink less purple-ish if you're able to. And please, don't align your images. Remove the |left code off the image, if you can't seem to figure it out. 07:06, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do all of that tomorrow. Just a question, why does the ear color have to be less purple? It looks pink enough to me, but I'm down with whatever. Opinions, anyone? 07:09, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Too much of a purple hue can make it look more bubblegum than earpink, and it looks a little unnatural. I think it could use a little more pink. 10:55, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:48, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

I swear the fur and ear pink looks a little purple.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

It doesn't look purple to me at all...? 00:23, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

To me, it does look pretty purple, especially the earpink and eyes. maybe also make the body shading curve more with the shape of the cat; it seems very unnatural for placement right now.

The eye are supposed to be purple. Is purple eyecolor not allowed? I swear I've seen it before. Also, I don't understand what you mean by "curve more with the shape"? 00:32, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Any eye color is allowed^^ The earpink is really kinda ear purple on this, though. And curve with the shape means making it not be as blocky and flow with the cat. Kinda like this. On this, it seems very square, and cats aren't blocky, per say.

Reuploaded 01:28, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Uh, I don't think purple eyes are allowed. We've always asked people to change that, and I've been forced myself to change that. Unless they are cited with purple eyes, it's very much considered unnatural and not permitted. =/

To me, the ear pink looks a little bright. 17:00, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded  20:47, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

The ear pink is still pretty purple... 02:57, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading as well 02:58, December 19, 2016 (UTC)]

Reuploaded 04:28, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main part of the body, but mainly along the spine. Also, the tail shading could use a bit of smoothing as well.

Reuploaded 23:41, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

Branch (HJ) (Ki) - For Approval
dont we all love it when our art programs hate us and our siblings pester us and we need food 23:15, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart, and it also needs to be named in the correct format to File:Branch (HJ).kit.png.

Donee 23:27, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

It only says "Branch.ki.png, are you missing the t? Also, define the earpink a little, I can barely see it. 23:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading as well, and add a bit more depth to it. 05:58, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaddedd  21:34, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading again please. It's still hardly noticeable. (btw I love the design you gave him!) 21:39, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink again as well; I couldn't see it on mobile or laptop very well.

Reuploaded  03:19, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink some more.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:58, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the stripes some? i'm having trouble making them out throught the shading 16:39, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

reeupploaaddeddd  04:15, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 18:07, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Please wait for at least five days before asking for comments. With activity how it is, three days isn't a good enough span of time. That being said, what's going on with the ear pink in <- ear? it looks unsmudged and like it was... idk, kinda sharpened and it seems to have these pixels at the end of the ear that look a bit off?

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't know about the rule change >.< 22:52, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Whorlpaw (Ro) - For Approval
~Patch   feather~   02:20, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

could you lighten the texture some please, this looks great Patch! —  Minkclaw   20:11, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  thanks. ~Patch    feather~   02:12, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

In proportion with tail length, I think the white could be expanded slightly on the tail to match the apprentice image

Re-uploaded.  ~Patch    feather~   03:48, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten the white a bit on the tail.

Re-uploaded.  ~Patch    feather~   01:13, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Cypresspaw (A) - CBA
05:26, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

can i nudge this for smth 19:02, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

No. =P Can you smooth out the rump shading a bit? I could have sworn I said this a couple days ago... apparently not.

reuploaded 06:16, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Dewpaw (HJ) (Ki) - For Approval
00:07, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the tail shading?

Re-uploaded. 21:19, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) - for approval
All layers from her apprentice image. <span style="">13:55 Sun Dec 18

Maybe smooth out the facial shading just a bit? Also, is this intentionally left sharp? I'm not sure how your shading style works for these blanks.

Marshkit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Meh. PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 16:07, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

This has to match the StarClan image.

It looks as though he has tabby paws, maybe take out the lines? Shypaw11 (talk) 16:51, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

They have to remove the lines anyways; editing the lineart isn't allowed on this wiki for PCA images. They can't alter the paws by adding extra lines.

Redone.PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 17:05, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

I still see lines on the paws, and I can't see the texture on this at all. The StarClan image has it, so this one needs it as well.

Redone PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 17:27, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Thin out the texture and contour it more to the shape of the image. It looks more akin to mottling right now. Use a 1px brush. That tends to help. <span style="">18:38 Sun Dec 18

Redone PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 18:49, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading please 01:37, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Redone PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 01:59, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define your light source? I can't tell which direction the light is hitting, and it all looks kinda shaded.

Redone PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 21:39, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Mind smudging the earpink just a bit? 03:41, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

This is too blotchy, but I like the paw color! Great job other then the texture! TawnyBracken (talk) 17:58, December 21, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Tawny the texture is supposed to match the StarClan image. 20:51, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (DF) ~ For Approval
had a bit of trouble with the hind leg alteration, but idk.

It looks like there are some white pixels on the tail (where it meets the hind leg). 21:59, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded smoothed the shading there; they aren't white pixels, it's just that there isn't much room to show shading depth there

Could you expand the shading a bit? It seems.. I dunno, lacking in shading, for lack of a better word. I would think there'd be a bit more, especially on the main body... right now, it looks like it's just underneath the cat, but there would be at least something on the rest of her body to show some muscle depth, I think?

Reuploaded

Perhaps fix the leg. It's supposed to be limp, but here it looks sort of twisted and short. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  14:53, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded elongated it, however, the elder and warrior images both show it with a weird bend, so I'm keeping that to match.

I honestly think the leg was fine before? It wasn't that much shorter, and it matched the style the other images have.

Updated Idek just swapped it back; I preferred it the other way, and I'd also still kept the old layer for that so.

Finpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors are from his apprentice image. Comments? 21:39, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit.

Reuploaded. 01:47, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink? I know the colors are the same, but I'm having issues seeing the ear pink on this image, and it looks like it's all the same shade as the base... which I know that's not the case.

Reuploaded. 04:38, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Duckkit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Welp, looks decent. Comments? 01:38, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading please. 03:38, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

I think he needs a tail similar to his father. 14:46, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

I can't see a pupil in the eyes?

That tail doesn't look good. ;-; 20:22, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little too neon. And can you try to make the tail thinner like his father's? 20:54, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 21:01, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste by the <-- paw

Redone 21:49, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. It's still pretty flat.

Toad (HJ) (Ro) - For Approval
idk I may tweak a few things. It's been a bad 24 hours and I can't think.

Great job Lightning! Alot better then the former I saw!TawnyBracken (talk) 17:59, December 21, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Please don't comment just to say that, you must give critique as well. Could you define tail shading? —  Minkclaw   22:52, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Actually, that comment's kind of offensive the the previous artist... I'm sure that they tried their best, Tawny.

Yarrowleaf (Ro) - For Approval
23:34, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Looking great! Define the light on the tail please. 00:02, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:25, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Hawkwing (K) ~ For Evaluation
This is my first charart! Comments? 01:11, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Looking great for your first one! ^^ Smudge the earpink just a bit. I can't tell if this has texture or not, but the other ones do. 01:18, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe fill in the nose? This is really good! Shypaw11 (talk) 01:22, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 01:23, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Nami (Lo) ~ For Approval
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Patchfoot (E) ~ For Approval
First elder and black-and-white cat. Who knew shading this would be so hard? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  14:49, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

White's looking gray. Also, define the shading on the black. 20:03, December 22, 2016 (UTC)