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Medicine Cat Blanks - For Approval
Thanks for all the votes!^^ I removed the whiskers,its easier to work on the blanks without them(will re-add them in the end) 20:16, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add the bridge of the ears onto them? Its the part next to the inside of the ear that has fur on it. You know what i mean right? 20:55, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Not all of the blanks have that, and imo, I don't think it's required. The rogue blanks, loner blanks, StarClan, and Early Settler blanks are prime examples.

Can you lengthen the back legs or shorten the front ones as cats generally have slightly longer back legs?

Well seeing as how the back legs are in the background and i think theres a little perspective going on here, i think theyd look a little smaller than the front ones, but they might need to be expanded a bit longer. Just a smidge. 21:32, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

Lengthen the body a little more, and raise it a few pixels; everything from the shoulder back. 21:35, 01/22/2016

This look really nice. :) There's a bit of perspective wonk going on, though, I think. If the cat's torso is facing forward like that, I think the back end should be a /little/ closer to the front end, and the back end should be higher up with the legs longer, if that makes sense, with the stomach smoothed out. Also, thin out all the legs and smooth out the cheeks on the shorthair? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 08:16, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

Can you possibly make them taller to match the other blanks? 08:33, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

The size is fine, Icy. Size doesn't need to match the other blanks, I think.  13:32 Sat Jan 23 

Can you smooth out some pixels on the longhair as well? Some of it doesn't match the shorthair, and idk if it's required or not, but do the pixels need to match? 13:44, January 23, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean it doesn't match? I'm a bit confused? Are you talking thickness...? Because the shorthair blanks are probably going to be smoother than the longhair ones... and I think they match well enough, unless what you're saying is going right over my head.

Re.ups Uh,i made it horrible :p I do the longhair tomorrow 21:01, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Curve the rump a little more naturally and bend the front leg thats sticking out a little bit more like the longhair? Could you also make the back leg farthest from us bend a little more naturally too? The "elbow" should be a little bit more concealed since its on an angle, and could you make that same paw a little bit more round and a tad bigger? And also make sure the cheeks match up a tad bit more on the shorthair. 21:52, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Man, a lot of things do happen when I'm away. This looks amazing I would've voted for it myself. Well, anyways, correct me if I'm wrong but, couldn't the cheeks be a bit more connected to the muzzle. I dunno, I'm thinking of realistic looking cats.

The tail on the shorthaired blank has a rather pointy tip, could you perhaps make it more rounded as to make it look more natural..? 15:29, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

reverted Can someone give me a redline pls?I just can't make them lppk right :P 18:24, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

http://www.ezimba.com/work/160126C/ezimba11244531024400.png Here, hope this helps. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:44, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Jayie^^ 21:05, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Make the longfurs a bit fluffier; drop the tummy a few pixels, and fluff the bum/haunch out a bit more. 21:08, 01/26/2016

This looks great. :D Way better than my wonky redline. XD The cheek on the right side of the shorthair's face seems to be sitting a little too low. Raise it up a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:22, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups :D 14:32, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Feel free to ignore me, this may just be me, but the shorthair tail looks just a tiiiny bit too long?  16:43 Wed Jan 27 

This is looking great! ^_^ Can you smooth out the tail and make the paws rounder? The upper part of the right leg on the short-haired also looks a little bit out of place, as it looks as if it's going inward.

Again, I can't explain anatomy well. Basically, fluff that haunch out! Make this fluff a bootylicious babe. Also, try to make the fur on the tail of the longhair more like the tail you had on the very first upload you made; in other words, make the fur smoother, and flow better. I seriously love these *-* 20:02, 01/27/2016

http://www.ezimba.com/work/160128C/ezimba11244580698700.png The neck is way too thick on my redline, not sure how to fix it, but this is what I mean by the cheek being too far down. The round part of the cheek should be right beside the eyes, and by making the cheek higher up, the head seems smaller, so you should make the head a little bigger as well, as I tried to illustrate here. :P And make the ears a little smaller. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:51, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thank you all ^^ 20:49, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

This looks wonderful. :D Thin out the lifted front leg on both and the neck on the shorthair a little? Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:04, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Part of a leaf is missing from the short-haired's herb on the right side.

Re-ups 22:01, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Hm let's try this out. Comments before approval? 01:12, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

ah, sorry, but the lineart on the back <-- leg and the both ears are a little thin. 02:16 Sun Jan 31

I think you should to fill them in with white so they look like the other blanks.. 2:43 Sun Jan 31

Do you think you could add whiskers? I think they need cropping, too, but that's a bit nitpicky.  08:52 Sun Jan 31 

Re-ups 13:00, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Let's try this again. Comments before approval? 17:52, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

I noticed that the right hind paw of the short-haired has one thicker line then the right hind paw of the long-haired one. There's also a line up on the short-haired's right knee that the long-haired doesn't have. And the left leg of the long-haired has thicker fur when the other legs compared to the shorter-haired, so remove that. Last but not least is the front left leg appears to be curving from the chest.

Re-ups 18:33, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Move the lines for the chest over to the right a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:55, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:06, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Okay so honestly I'm going to try this again because I honestly do not see anything wrong with these and a few others agree with me. You can break this if you want. Comments before approval? 23:46, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

The lineart on the shoulder closest to us of the shortfurred one looks a tad choppy, is there any way you could smooth it out, transition it to one pixil, or make that portion one pixil entirely? 06:53, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 16:04, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

The linear art still looks choppy on the long haired blank.

Re-ups 13:57, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

There's a small gap between the front legs. It just looks a little awkward to me. *_*

Re-ups 20:31, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

The upper part of the long-haired's front left leg is extended a little more than the short-haired's. Maybe add a little more fur?

Re-ups Eh,getting tired with this blanks :p 19:04, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

The bend of the front legs should be lower down, and smoothed out, if that makes sense, it shouldn't be that bunched up if the leg is that extended. The chest/neck lines (by neck line I mean the little short line beside the plants) could be moved right a little. Other than that, I think it's great. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:39, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

I may be talking nonsense so feel free to disregard, but I think that the shorthair's <-- hindleg's haunch should be more curved, it seems more straight than the other one. Also, I think that (for both long and short hairs) the front paw that is being held out should have the "thumb" part of it tilted a bit more toward the cat's left paw, but idk that might just be me. These are so pretty ^^ 22:51 Thu Feb 4

Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here.

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail?

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail?

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean.

Cloudpaw (RF) (A) - CBA
Let's play a game called "guess Jayce's favorite prefix". Is it obvious enough? 8D

Darken the shading a little bit? 18:50 Wed Jan 27

Re-uploaded.

Shade that small white spot below the left back leg.

Re-uploaded.

There's a little bit of white leaking onto the lineart of the same leg.

Re-uploaded. Tinkered with something, but it's impossible for there to be leaking white onto the lineart- that's my topmost layer, barring the layer that has the eye color. o.O Everything also has a clipping mask, so it's not leaking...

Yes there is. 03:22, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

No, there's not. I checked for waste in three or four different ways when I reuploaded, and I cannot see anything.

Can you smooth out the shading on the tail and the back of the spine? 01:10, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This looked better in PS. =/

Change the shading source on her shoulder? The shading seems to be on the right side everywhere else screw shading white cats

Re-uploaded. idk I use this basic source on everything else so who knows?

Uh... everything else on the page appears to have gotten comments, but this has sat at least five days without anything. Can I have something here?

Comments before approval? 19:51, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Hawkpaw (SC) (A) - For Approval
so comments? I know the ear pink looks a little bad. 16:42, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, as I can't see any at all.

Re-Upps— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:58, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

The shading still really needs to be darkened. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:00, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the ear pink 17:36, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

I see some waste. 18:47, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes more yellow? They look amber to me, but feel free to disregard this if they're not.

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 14:52, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the shading needs to be darkened a lot more, I can't see it at all. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:11, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

This is going to sound really annoying, but I really cannot see the shading well, and in the areas where I can, it is very hard-edged. I have looked on multiple screens, and consistently cannot clearly see the shading. Darken the shading a lot and blur/smudge/whatever it. I'm sorry if this came off as rude, that was not my intention at all. <span style="">18:48 Wed Jan 27

Can I suggest you lighten the base slightly it will help the shading stand out. 22:14, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps that's as light as I can go or it''ll look like a regular gray.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 18:15, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks black to me and I think it is possible for you to lighten it more but I don't know. 20:15, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'll upload soon.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:08, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

The shading needs to be darkened and smoothed out a bit. 22:25, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink seems a tad bit too neon, although that might just be me. 00:42, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

will upload tomorrow.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 23:39, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Could you blur the earpink a little more and add depth to the shading? <span style="">15:17 Wed Feb 3

Still working?

Yes— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:12, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has gone over one week without uploads, so I'd need to decline it anyways due to PCA's guidelines, which are clearly stated at the top of the page.

I'll take over. <span style="">16:29, 02/5/2016

Reuploaded <span style="">17:09, 02/5/2016

Rileypaw (A) ~ For Approval
I did a thing. And it is glorious. 01:21, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the dark gray stripes around his legs, maybe? This is great. Jaysnow (talk) 01:22, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

There wouldn't be much shading there to begin with, since the lightsource is shining on his legs closest to us. Could I possibly get a second opinion? 02:13, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Good point.... Jaysnow (talk) 02:15, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the stomach and chest shading a bit, and define it everywhere else....if there is any. I honestly can't tell.

reups I defined it on the legs but since my light source is shining from nearly directly onto them, I'd like not to define it any more 13:30, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest and belly some?  <span style="">13:56 Wed Jan 27 

Define the shading a little more on the very bottom of the belly? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

He does have a paler belly, is that what you're seeing? If not, what exactly do you mean? 15:10, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Also if i lighten it any more ill be told to define the shading depth everywhere else again since theyre on the same layer. Ill get to it when i get home. 18:18, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

at least one of his ears should be dark grey. 19:04, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

reups This is as much as I am lightening it for the sake of keeping shading depth 13:57, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

reups again accidentally left the stripes layer on normal 14:40, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading on the haunch?

The source is coming nearly directly onto the haunch? 04:22, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Fox. The haunch looks pretty flat to me. You don't need to expand it a lot, just some.  <span style="">11:02 Mon Feb 1 

reups If the shading needs to be darkened again let me know, it did a weird thing 01:05, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  16:26, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Rileypaw (Kit) - For Approval
Right let's try this again... I will make him short haired and add a coller if need. 16:59, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base coat, as well as thin out the stripes and add more? You have to match Snowdapple's apprentice image, I don't know if you've seen.  <span style="">17:05 Wed Jan 27 

darken the tail shading as well I can barely see it— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 17:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Youll need to add a collar since he was a kittypet. Also do you need my file? 18:16, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Does he need a collar? I am having trouble putting a collar on a long haired blank. 18:37, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

You can borrow the collar lineart from Stormcloud's kit image if you like. I can send you an image with just the lineart if you want.  <span style="">18:42 Wed Jan 27 

Also technically wouldnt you need to wait until blossompaw was archived before posting this? 19:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think they would, since it was mistakenly reserved/posted, and the other artist came forward to claim it? Not sure in this situation though. Sorry I don't have anything constructive to say on the art, but it's all been said. <span style="">19:17, 01/27/2016

That would be great Shinx and actually Snowdapple would it be possible for me to get that file. I want to re do him 20:10, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hope this helps :)  <span style="">20:21 Wed Jan 27 

Reupload fixed collar and stripes. 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the base to match the apprentice? <span style="">21:13, 01/27/2016

Um it's the same I colour picked? 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

It looks much darker. Either define the light, or make sure you didn't colorpick from a shaded part. Define the shading depth too.  <span style="">21:42 Wed Jan 27 

Reupload defined shading and lightened 21:51, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hey shinx could you do me a flavor and give velvet the file? Im out of town rn 22:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Sure thing buddy- Velvet, do you have an e-mail or something I can send it to?  <span style="">22:20 Wed Jan 27 

Yeah sure it's Leia.clark@gmail.com 22:21, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened base 23:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Remove the collar. It is not said anywhere in Ravenpaw's Farewell that Riley had a collar, and it's an assumption to say that he did have one.

I will remove it only if more people say 11:57, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

It's an assumption to have the collar, Velvet. Assumptions are not allowed on character pixels, so you have to remove it. It doesn't matter if people disagree; if there's no mention of a collar (which there is not), then he doesn't get one. Simple as that.

Remove the collar. Also make both ears dark gray, as seen on the loner image 14:38, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload there is no need to get angry. I just did want to remove the collar only to be told to put it back on. Any way removed it and my kit always had grey ears. 18:26, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading. 22:19, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload defined shading 09:23, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the parts that aren't darker, such as the legs and head, neck, etc. Also, is there texture on this? I can't make it out, since mine does have texture. There are also pale parts that need to be on the muzzle, neck, chest, underbelly, and paws. Did you get the file from Shinx? 13:59, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I played around with the texture slightly but if I add too much it looks messie. Also lightened paws but were they really ment to be paler I never knew. 17:36, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading.

The shading is getting a little too flat, could you define the light? 04:23, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened him, he looks like a wee white tiger. 08:12, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add a little more shading around the edges? The shading depth could be defined a little, and it appears it might be leaking just a tad. Also, define the shading on <-- leg and the tail. 02:49, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload difined shading 16:27, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the texture, please. <span style="">15:18 Wed Feb 3

Reupload I am so much bother with this texture! 18:35, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Can you define the pale parts? 20:19, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Patch (RF) (Ki) - CBA
Dilute tortie! <span style="">16:45 Thu Jan 28

Do you think you could make the orange a little bit oranger? I know it's supposed to be pale, but right now I'm having trouble telling it's supposed to be orange at all.  <span style="">17:10 Thu Jan 28 

Could I get a second opinion on that? I think it looks pretty orange myself. <span style="">18:08 Thu Jan 28

A second opinion has arrived, and I think it looks pale brown, not orange... although, this is still really pretty no matter what you choose to do with the coloring; nicely done!

Also he needs a collar but apart from that he's lovely 19:19, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! If you think the collar is too referency I can remove the star. <span style="">23:32 Thu Jan 28

Move the collar down a couple pixels, and the style is fine. We have Pokemon collars, ones with lightning patterns, using the colors of the transgender flag, the nonbinary flag, A RAINBOW COLLAR, ect. Your collar is more than fine and I wholeheartedly approve of the reference. 8D

Actually, no, you'll need to remove the collar. It is not said anywhere in Ravenpaw's Farewell that Riley had a collar, and it's an assumption to say that he did have one.

Don't all kittypets get collars? After all, it's part of the blank for adults. <span style="">2:25 Fri Jan 29

It doesn't matter; we have absolutely no proof that Patch, Riley, Bella, and Lulu wore collars. Adult cats are different, and these are kits. Many young cats don't wear collars, and it's an assumption to say they have one. I searched RF and couldn't find one mention of a collar at all, therefore it really shouldn't be on here.

Re-uploaded RIP Collar <span style="">14:15 Fri Jan 29

This is lovely but I don't see why he can't have a collar? Their are adult cats with collars that aren't mentioned. 18:29, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

They were never mentioned with collars and Patch and the other kits don't get them for that reason.

Would you mind defining the earpink a tad? I cannot see it. 22:20, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups I don't think I can define any more than this, so I hope it looks better. <span style="">18:00 Sun Jan 31

Lighten the shading? 00:18, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:13 Wed Feb 3

CBA?

Bellapaw (A) - Declined
thanks to Shinx for uploading for me. i have not done a single Warriors Wikia Character Art in months so please, bear with me <span style="">17:08 Thu Jan 28

>sees 'Bella' >assumes the cat will look like Berry's adorable kitty

Can you define the shading a bit? I'm having trouble seeing it.

Its fine --Belllastar (talk) 00:23, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, it needs defining. With the tint, I'm having trouble distinguishing it from the coat pattern in some places.  <span style="">01:48 Fri Jan 29 

Idk if this counts as a repeat comment, but add some shading to the chest^^ this is so pretty I'm gonna

Still working?

As per PCA's guidelines, you know I have to decline this. I'm sorry, dear. ;-;

Patch (RF) (KP) - For Approval
Will tweak the pattern after I finish my assignments. BCPrincess, I adore this design^.^ <span style="">13:45 Tue Feb 2

Smudge the markings more? <span style="">3:45 Wed Feb 3

I think the markings match fine. 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

A little bit of smudging wouldn't hurt. Princess' markings on her image are a bit softer than on this one.

Reuploaded <span style="">01:24 Thu Feb 4

Pasha (KP) - For Approval
probably gonna redo this later. i was in a hurry. <span style="">21:48 Tue Feb 2

Could you maybe lighten the base slightly so we can see the shading? 22:19, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base is fine, as the description does state very clearly "almost black" but could you define facial shading just a smidge? 03:23, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This could be my screen but he looks too dark to be "almost black". Perhaps a darkness like Crowfeather would do.

Define the shading depth? <span style="">15:19 Wed Feb 3

I think the darkness is fine but can you add some more eye ddepth? Unless it's there and I can't see it. 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base could be lightened a little bit- she was supposed to be almost black, and this looks black. Crowfeather's shade would work wonderfully for this, I think. I also think the shading could be darkened a bit too.

can you make him more brown too. 15:22, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Bellapaw (Lo) ~ For Approval
I tried to match Berry's apprentice while Rileypaw was on CBA, but I couldn't ;_; So instead have a classic tabby  <span style="">19:15 Fri Feb 5