Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Poppyfrost (K) - Redone
Colors picked from Sorreltail's kit Moo (talk) 08:24, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you dull the shading tint some, and maybe smudge the blotches a bit more? 19:04, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sure! I just cant get on my computer for a few hours! Moo (talk) 23:36, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 06:53, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

There should be more variation in the dapple size and shape, and the patches should be sharper than what you've currently got too - if you'd like I have sorreltail's warrior file handy (which is the master design/colours)

I dont think i know how to make them sharper and still looknatural... Moo (talk) 22:18, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Just give it a go, it doesn't hurt to just just try it - after all, this place is for constructive criticism so we'll be able to help you to get it looking right if it needs it. Again, I can offer the file I mentioned above that might help getting it to look right.

Thanks! '''Reuploaded! Moo (talk) 08:42, October 13, 2019 (UTC)'''

The patch placements have some differences from Sorreltail's kit, notably on the face/bum etc

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:13, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

From Sorrel's kit, this is missing the ginger patch on the << side of the haunch, and I believe the white eartip on the << ear could be defined

Tallstar (D) - Redone
color picked off the image directly 03:56, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Should he have the white paws and tail-tip? I know the image doesn't have them, but he's still described with them. 04:37, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Also, he needs a long tail. 04:39, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Adding on - he's also cited with a white tail tip

Brighten up the white; he doesn’t look black-and-white at all.

reup will add long tail and fix other issues when i come back from class. also, this is what happens when you solely match his image and ignore his description... 12:24, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the tail tip and new paw whites slightly; seem a bit sharp

reup 20:33, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail-tip. 20:43, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe extend the canvas so the tail tip isn’t abruptly cut off?

reup 13:01, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Tallstar (R) ~ Redone
OA was me. redone to match official art

the belly on the deputy only seems to be on >> this side of the image, with black being under the front arms?

can you add some shading on the << front paw and smooth it on the >> front paw?

Re-uploaded

Tallstar (Kp) - Redone
uh here... Moo (talk) 22:58, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the deputy- he needs three white paws and a white tail-tip. The patch style doesn't quite match the set either. -- 23:05, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

also needs texture 23:12, 10/16/2019

Fox stated previously its not texture; I think its just the shading style and possibly highlights that are giving that effect. There is some very minor texture on the white though, going by a previous comment.

regardless it still needs to match the style of whatever preceded this image, in my opinion it is considered texture, just because i also do that kind of "shading style" where i basically just drag it around the image to make it look like texture, but it's still texture 23:15, 10/16/2019

It's not texture, it's a stylized shading. Millie is not required to match shading style. ​​​

O.o Moo (talk) 23:18, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:26, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

The white should not stretch all the way up the forehead. I also think the colors still look slightly off- the base should be #0b1213, the white should be #d9dada. The patch style still doesn't seem to match the set, maybe try a combo of smudging/sharpening the patches to see if that works? I think the shading tint could be dulled back a bit as well. -- 23:30, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

just a reminder that shading tint is artist's choice, so if Millie doesn't wish to change it, she doesn't have to. also the tail needs to be tweaked to be longer too, per his name and all.

fox commented on a prior Tall redo section that there was indeed texture on the white on the deputy's file -- that it wasn't entirely just styling from shading. that does need to be added to a degree

Sorry for the confusion! There is texture on the white. Looking at burnt's file most other things are just highlights

Tigerstar (TPB) (App) - Redone
Most recent OA was Icy I believe. 02:57, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bramblestar (App) - Redone
Most recent OA was Icy. 03:04, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Tallstar (Lo) - Redone
oa was david

could you make the patches less smudgy and have the edges be slightly smoother? 12:12, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded how's that?

Tawnypelt (A) - Redone
OA is me 14:33, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

White needs to be white. This was a main reason for her images being done. Could have sworn I said that, but Fox must have not told you.

I also think the brown could be darker to make it more black? 17:14, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

reup it is supposed to be white 01:51, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

still looks brown, and if it's supposed to be mostly matching to the tug and whatever art, the patches are much too smudged in comparison. the patches on the tail also don't really seem to match. 06:34, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

Im sorry hut why exactly does it have to match to the T to the official art? Cant burnt have a tiny bit of freedom with th pattern? 08:03, 10/18/2019

the entire point of the nomination was to match it to the art. that's what it says on the tweak page, and the only reason it was nominated to begin with was that she's one of the very few with an actual consistent pattern that was decided to be matched to. 08:06, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (DF) ~ Redone
22:51, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

The texture seems more defined/sharper on the others in the set - could you tweak that? I also think some shading on the earpink might be good, it seems to stick out some. The belly white could also be just a bit more streaky smudgy

Squirrelflight (Ghost) ~ Tweaked
OA was Scarlet. Tweaked for torn ear tip. Comments? 23:35, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (Queen) ~ Tweaked
OA was Crystal. Tweaked for base color and texture. 00:59, October 18, 2019 (UTC)

The OA is actually Squidward, Crystal's version was declined. Anywho I think the texture could be defined some- while I know it's not that visible on her other images, I'm hardly seeing it here. -- 01:01, October 18, 2019 (UTC)