Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 48

Birchfall(K) - Approved
First kit and first tabby! Woohoo! Comments and/or critique?--Shaf Girl  16:28, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his paws.  Trout leap  17:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Great job but I can't see any black in/on his eyes.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:19, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading, and the eye has a pupil, Artimas.--Shaf Girl  03:05, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes like on his warrior image--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     06:45, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl  03:33, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Try to darken his fur a little. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:12, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the fur color is ok, but make the earpink a bit bigger. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:20, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl  02:43, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  18:32, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !  21:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Onestar (D) - Approved
Okay... the most failish image ever... It doesn't look like either the leader or warrior image... but I tried to incorportate the two. I'd say constructments, but I think critisism? is more appropriate, so fire away! ✐S aN  dY  21:39, March 6, 2010 (UTC) He looks awesome, Sandy :D It might just be my eyes, but on his leader image his muzzle looks slightly cream colored rather than white... maybe change it on this image? Seriously though, if I had attempted this it would have been way worse. insaneular   Talk  21:42, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'm boring and sad so I fixed it right away. Don't know if the changes are showing properly though. ✐S aN  dY  21:52, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good Sandy! But maybe add more earpink. -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:53, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

More as in... lighter? darker? brighter? bigger? sorry Sandy is dumb... ✐S aN  dY  11:22, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think they mean bigger, but I'd disagree. Maybe lighten it, as I can't really see it right not. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 15:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'Reuploaded ✐S  aN  dY  15:49, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I just love this image, good job! It might be just me, but the stripes on the leader image are more dark and dusky looking than on this image, but other than that, it's great! Vancou verpath  00:01, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is quite good, Sandy! BUT, the white muzzle and the rest of his pelt need to blend together a little more. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:46, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did my best. Duskier isn't really possible unless you want me to redo the whole image as I used the burn tool so it darkened the pelt colour to make the stripes (if that makes sense). The muzzle won't blend any more. ✐S aN  dY  21:44, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

i think he looks good. I cant really tell on his other images but should there be a stripe at the base of his tail? Haikage Ash's Talk 01:11, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐S  aN  dY  18:38, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's ready. CBA? Haikage Ash's Talk 19:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Was Onestar even a formal deputy because Tallstar's deputy was Mudclaw when he died so was Onestar a deputy? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 19:07, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Before tallstar died he named Onewhisker deputy. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:10, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !  21:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) - Approved
Not much to say on this, I used the same style as I used on Dawnflower's apprentice image. Comments and suggestions? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:04, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

He's longhaired but besides that this is amazing. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

*face-palm* Oh wow, I really should have noticed that, especially since I had his image beside the image I was shading the entire time...I'm not sure if I can fix it or if I'll have to get someone else to fix it for me, but let me see what I can do. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:14, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

If you cant I can replace the blank for you. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:19, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I got it okay. I had to erase the tail and then recolor and shade in the longhair tail, and color in the extra fur on the belly, but aside from that it was really easy to fix. Did I miss anything? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:35, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Good job. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:39, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing Icy! Just blur the haunch shading a tad. It looks a little dark. Icy Invading the fire 02:40, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments Ash and Ice. :) Does this look better? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:49, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, Icy. (: Amazing image! I don't think i could do better, or anyone else. Icy Invading the fire 02:51, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Icy's right, this looks perfect! CBA? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !  21:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Ki) - Approved
11:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice! But the shading isn't very noticeable, can you make it darker or add highlights? Also, add neck shading, and maybe make the white less bright, more pale gray. Vancou verpath  14:45, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 16:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

make the earpink a little bigger and darken the shading on his white parts a bit more. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make the earpink larger and darken his shading on the white parts more. Fire-★  22:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 13:23, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

His chest looks cream coloured. Go to a greyish white instead of a creamy white. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 16:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded His warrior version looks creamish too, but maybe lighten the cream if you can. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:34, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The grey should extend onto the legs a little, cover the eyes:  Dark hallows 00:12, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 21:46, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

It still isn't covering the eyes. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:40, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:38, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink a touch. This is good. :) ♪   B  a  t   ♫  01:45, March 5, 2010 (UTC)!

Should the white maybe go between the eyes, and then above them a bit, like on the picture? :3 This is very cute! ^^ Brightfrost  of SunClan...  07:37, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dang! its so hard to re upload correctly. Evanphoto 21:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did your changes show? Haikage Ash's Talk 02:54, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the earpink is brighter Evanphoto 13:16, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

The gray still needs to cover the eyes. Haikage Ash's Talk 14:52, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 10:34, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the transition a tiny bit. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:58, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 01:36, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his back, and this will be ready :) Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:10, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedEvanphoto 20:24, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! CBA? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:41, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !  21:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)