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Dapplepelt (ES) - For Approval
23:54, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups just realized I forgot to smudge a few markings 23:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the markings some more please 00:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a tad? oh dang I want this but this is so beautiful 01:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reups Thanks Fox 09:58, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There should be thinner and a greater amount of stripes. I also think her patches are paler than this. 10:11, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

theyre not paler, theyre duller. 11:43, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

'reups I use highlights, that;'s why the color's brighter. I dulled them down a bit though. 15:35, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Can you shrink the amount of white from her belly. It doesnt go that far down on her other images 02:53, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:23, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the white paws? 13:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Indeed I can 17:50, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

This is hot. Blur the haunch shading a lil bit? 19:04, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I really should label my layers, I keep smudging the black instead of the shading >_> 20:45, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the facial shading just a little? 08:55, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reups 22:58, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you dull the paches a little more Belllastar (talk) 01:00, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'd rather not, unless I absolutely have to. The only way to do that is turn off the highlights completely, which is the only thing making it look brighter. 08:57, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Well, do you need the highlights? It is kind of throwing the color off, but if the image doesn't look like what you wanted it to look without the highlights, then I don't suggest you to remove them. 09:23, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't need them, no, but I've used them on literally every other image I've made (not counting tweaks) and haven't had to turn them off, even though some of them are much brighter than this. Plus, at least on my screen, the color looks almost exactly the same as the ancient tribe image, which is the on I picked the color from. Plus, turning them off makes a pretty minimal difference :/

Sorry for being stubborn. 18:07, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can barely see a difference at all, honestly. I think the colors are fine as they are. o.o

If anything, you should match the MC in terms of color, not the ancient, as I'm pretty sure the MC was first. 04:18, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

But it does match? If anything, it might be the shading or highlighted areas that make it look like it doesn't match.

Get rid of the white 20:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Also waste between the front legs 18:24, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 11:25, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

yep, wii stopped working for me for some reason. It works on Safari apparently, though. weird.... 01:25, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 01:43, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

I feel really bad about this, but since I was the person who designed the pattern and she was nominated while this was up, I was planning on making the white patches colored so that it's not "white" while still not changing the pattern...I had no idea this was even up and would have said something before but I didn't want it to have to get tweaked right after approval, is there anyway you could do that? I'm going to work on it right now  02:11, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, sure thing, is this what you meant? 11:16, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

And now you'll need to add some brown to this. It was suggested on the tweak page, that way the color blends... or something like that.

Dappled Pelt is an orange-and-white tortoiseshell in MFV, do you think you could fix that? 12:26, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

so... do I just put the white back? 08:44, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

went ahead and put the brown on I'll add the white when MFV is released and it's cited on her page. 13:27, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

i'm pretty positive orange-and-white means mainly that, so I would just dull down the amount of other colors. also theres waste around the paws 14:04, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

waste on the paws 12:50, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

fox i already said that 13:15, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Jagged Peak (Alt ES) ~ For Approval
wow he's adorable. Belllastar (talk) 13:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Did you forget the earpink? lol. Thicken the shading on the main body; nice job! 14:11 Sat Oct 24

Define the light on the legs and tail. 14:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ya I did and I struggled with tail shading, but i will try again --Belllastar (talk) 14:19, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define overall shading. 14:46, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups what do you think of the crippled foot, and can somebody fix the link to his page Belllastar (talk) 15:32, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front legs/chest a little bit more. 18:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define facial shading a bit? He gets these great images and he's so annoying, heh --Dewsplash (talk) 01:07, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:07, October, 25, 2015

I think the stripes taper a bit more on his other images. they also seem to be more hard edged and they seem to be darker. 09:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I disagree aboat the stripes but i'm fixing the shading right now Belllastar (talk) 13:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Fff I was looking at the wrong image. Lease define the shading depth. 14:27, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

And could you define the light on the front legs, maybe? 23:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes just a tiny bit. Also define the light on the chest and face, if that's not already been said (I'm kinda tired and can't focus). Also, define the ear pink- it's pretty much all in shadow, I think, and I can't see it at all.

No date on this. Declining. 20:58, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please don't decline this I worked so hard, I reserved this on october 21st 2015, I am sorry I thought that was for tweaking only and this I my second charart, please cut me some slack, if you decline this I am going to cry! --Belllastar (talk) 22:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Bell it has to be declined because you didnt put your reserve date down, and that's part of the rules. 22:50, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

can I re-claim it then and add the date again (I realy was proud of this guy and wanted to see it be approved) --Belllastar (talk) 00:09, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Since its declined you have to wait 2 weeks to reclaim it, so someone could have a chance to try it. --Dewsplash (talk) 00:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 00:15, October, 29, 2015

then can I tweek the art and do his non crippled image, or do I have to-redo it --Belllastar (talk) 00:29, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Only warriors and above are allowed to tweak images 00:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I know I meen can I use the same art, just redo his foot for the non-cripled versoin --Belllastar (talk) 00:40, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to wait 2 weeks to reclaim, that's only on images declined for the one month limit, and yours wasn't. I'm not sure how long the waiting period is, though. 00:56, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

It's nonsense that you have to wait for two weeks. That's only if its declined due to the one month limit. You can re-reserve this right away. 00:58, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Yay!! --Belllastar (talk) 01:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups thanks to Burntclaw and Icebreeze (luv your user names) --Belllastar (talk) 01:24, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I still think more light could be added to the face and chest. Perhaps either erase some of the shading there, or add a new layer of highlights? (for highlights I suggest setting the layer mode to overlay, then drawing white onto the areas where the light hits) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:17, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Added hylights all over (I just learned how) --Belllastar (talk) 02:50, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Add light to his chest 13:43, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink and its shape- I can't see it at all. I've also renamed this to File:Jagged Peak.es.alt... I'm pretty sure he gets another image without the broken leg..? I think? Please reupload under the proper filename now.

The chest is fine Its meant to be dark. --Belllastar (talk) 16:41, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

There should still be a little light there, with this source. Also, define the earpink just a tad 22:42, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Can I use the same file if I do the Non crippled image or do I have to redo it? --Belllastar (talk) 22:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Add more light on the face and chest 04:49, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups --Belllastar (talk) 20:30, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading.

It's fine (I losst the file so thats not possibal) --Belllastar (talk) 01:39, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

You can tweak it while it's still up, it's very much possible, and i agree it should be sharpened. 01:41, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

how do I just tweak the shadeing without seprate layers? --Belllastar (talk) 02:41, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Please use proper grammar bell it's part of the rules. As for the image, open it up as a whole in your program, and just put a layer on top of it on multiply and basically add some more shading 02:45, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Daisytoe (Star)- For Approval
How do you not thumb the images, idk ;-; Anyway, here is my Daisytoe starclan  thingy ;u; Idk how to not thumb the images im so sorry DX

Sagestream (talk) 02:50, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

-- Reups - Forgot grey paws oops Sagestream (talk) 02:56, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yo, this is pretty good! Maybe blur/smudge the shading a bit? Also, to not thumb the images, sue source mode and simply get rid of the "thumb". 03:20, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Thanks, Burnt c: Sagestream (talk) 03:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. --Dewsplash (talk) 03:37, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 03:37, October, 25, 2015

Reups Sagestream (talk) 03:41, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading and add eye depth. 03:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 04:00, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste (I think) bordering outside of the charart. Blur and define the shading some more.

Reups u.u Sagestream (talk) 04:23, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

You're uploading a different image every time. Please upload under File:Daisytoe.star.png to prevent the unnecessary deletion of images. 09:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. 12:14, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

The ears on the mickey mouse heads should be more rounded. Also, the base for the white is pure white, if that helps. (If you want the file, just ask.) 13:17, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Apologies, Burnt. it just kept popping up with the 'you have a file with this name already here' and i finally found the overwrite button... ^^' Sagestream (talk) 17:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading, please? 23:13, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 02:11, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

There's a strange darker blob on >>> that leg. Could you somehow fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:10, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

This image needs to be named Daisytoe.star.png so it works with the charart template on her page. Also, as a reminder, the next time you reserve an image, you also need to add a date. I've fixed it for you this time, but the next time, your image will be declined.

I think the shading is leaking from the lineart along the belly 17:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sagestream (talk) 02:03, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please name the file Daisytoe.star.png Like Skye told you. And the ears from the micky mouse pattern still need to be a little more rounder. Thre is also waste on her shoulder. 02:07, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups For me, it says it's name is Daisytoe.star.png.... Sagestream (talk) 02:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

-- OHH okay i found out the problem, i capitalized the 'Star' Sagestream (talk) 02:20, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The waste is still there. 02:44, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's gone?? Sagestream (talk) 03:23, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see waste... And since you know what you're doing, I'm promoting you into an apprentice. 03:25, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ok what you're already an apprentice ^^; next time put the title as For Approval 03:26, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I was a kit when I first made this image so that's why it was "For Evaluation" :p Sagestream (talk) 04:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

White's looking gray. Nice job! 05:18, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

My main pelt layer is actually pure white; maybe it's the shading? Sagestream (talk) 05:37, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the stomach we=here the tail and the elbow meets. 12:42, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see where the shading leak is..... Sagestream (talk) 23:12, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's mainly on the spot where the tail and the main body intersect, and it's leaking away from the belly too. I hope that helped! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:38, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I think i got it. ;u; Sagestream (talk) 02:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Went ahead and fixed an alignment for you. ^.^ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:15, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still see leaking shading on the belly. 13:42, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 18:20, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Don't align your images. Can you brighten the white on the main body? It's looking a little gray. Also, smooth out the tail-tip shading. 20:50, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

reups I can't really brighten the main white, it's pure white Sagestream (talk) 21:19, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

then thin out the shading 09:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the face seems to be just a strait blurred line (ha, blurred lines) Mind curving it a bit so it looks more realistic? 12:29, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re ups  u.u Sagestream (talk) 04:42, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 04:48, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

the shading is still flat and the legs are very grey. 16:37, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can it be smoothed out on the main body as well? 03:43 Fri Nov 6

Riverstar (Cotp) - For Approval
Don't comment on shading, I'm gonna define that. Also River Ripple is second best cat. 20:59, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are darker than on his other images. Agreed. He is awesome 23:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a little too blurry - but, you don't need to change it. Beautiful job. Sagestream (talk) 23:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I can redo the stripes if you want, I'm not super happy with them either. 03:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

blur the stripes a tad more. 03:48, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten them Belllastar (talk) 11:19, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on his tail. Could you sharpen the stripes, too? 16:00 Thu Oct 29

the white pixel is the blank in general, i'll get to that. but right now, i'm confused. do you guys want me to blur the stripes or sharpen them? i'm getting confusing comments. -appledash who cant signature on the school computer b/c she cant find the little key to do it with

Ignore the latter part of my comment(Where it's crossed out). 22:16 Thu Oct 29

Re-uploaded: 00:20, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading on <== that leg 09:08, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Fix the area above the tail on his hind leg, it looks like the shading was accidentally blurred/ diluted. 18:49, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Add/define belly shading? -- 20:27, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 21:00, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the leg to our right. Maybe try adding another layer of thinner shading to fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:15, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 18:32, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking on the tail ouo 02:58, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 07:36, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add more dempth to chest shading? --Dewsplash (talk) 00:11, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 01:23, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

add light to the legs 08:50, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I didn't totally just lose the file to this. <_< 22:46, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, especially on the face 03:43, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh the stripes seem to be very hard edged with barely blurred pixels surrounding them. 04:17, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I blurred the stripes, I don't know if they look too blurred now. 04:44, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Houndstar (star) ~ For Approval
I just made stealth's beautiful pattern look bad ;; 09:52, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Those beautiful eyes *.* there's an unblurred brown patch on his ear 10:06, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  10:09, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit more depth and define to the shading? --Dewsplash (talk) 01:37, October 30, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash,01:37, October, 30, 2015

I don't think the brown on the leader is as blurred as you have it on here...

Do you need a headshot of the leader Bramble? I used highlights and shading over everything except for the lineart. I didn't blur, I used a smudge tool, soft brush. Trying using that and it should match better. (oh and you'll probably need to smudge a bit to get it right) 06:34, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Sure! Id like it. Ill try to reup as soon as I get back home. 21:22, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Here ya go! No shading or highlights, and I'm pretty sure it still looks good! 22:05, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded I hope I got everyone's stuff... 00:08, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think the patches on the leader appear to be smudged a very, very little more than how you appeared to smudge it here. If it doesn't, I apologize, I've been exhausted lately. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:17, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it matches fine, but if stealth says it needs to be smudged, I'll smudge it more. 13:07, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Just make sure it's smudged in the direction of the fur that's all. Also, the white isn't pure white, just noting. 21:10, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope people see the difference... 23:53, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a tad 23:57, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 14:57, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I havent had time to work on it, i'll most in a few minutes. 19:54, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  boop 20:02, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Chiveclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
* sans for your soul 12:44 Fri Oct 30

I'd say the shading could be lightened some more, as I can't see any texture beneath it. Great image! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:28, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Opacity and colours were all from the MC and that passed easily. You wouldn't see the texture in shadow anyway >.> 14:44 Fri Oct 30

... Ok. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 23:20, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Berry, please calm down a little bit- they were merely suggesting a way to improve your image and there's no need express annoyance over it. As for this image, try expanding the chest shading- It appears that this cat is sitting in intense shadow and compared to the rest of the image, it looks flat. 03:36, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

still working? 13:22, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 11:59 Wed Nov 4

Squirrelwhisker (Star) ~ For Approval
I think the warrior has texture, but if I'm mistaken I can remove it. So proud of this! 14:10 Fri Oct 30

I'll fix the whole in the tail next upload. 14:11 Fri Oct 30

Define the texture. Also, would you like the file? The pattern is pretty hard to match. 14:55, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Yeah, the file would be useful. My email is butterflycupcakeprincess@gmail.com. 15:04 Fri Oct 30

Re-ups Thanks for the file, Blue. 17:12 Fri Oct 30

Shorten the whiskers on --> side by a few pixels. They probably should match <-- side a bit more in length...and I think the ones I asked you to shorten are a bit too long anyways.

Re-ups Now they look really awkward. I'll try to make them droopier next upload. 1:09 Sat Oct 31

Re-ups fixed whiskers. 15:18 Sat Oct 31

can you make them curve more gradually? whiskers dont usually just droop off suddenly. 20:21, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Those whiskers are the bane of my existence. 14:24 Mon Nov 2

Define the shading, please. 02:00, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 13:49 Tue Nov 3

The tail on the warrior has a darker tip, base, and three tail rings. I count five different rings here and no darker base of the tail.

Re-ups Blue sent me the file and there is no dark base of the tail on the warrior. I think it's shading/texture that you're seeing. I did however have an extra stripe. <span style="">14:14 Tue Nov 3

Pebbleheart (ES) ~ For Approval
Oh sheesh I love Pebbleheart <3 I've never thought much about him before the Dawn of the Clans Arc. Oh and colours from the warrior. 23:13, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and add more? <span style="">0:48 Sun Nov 1

Do you mean on the main body and tail? Most of the other stripes match the other images generally. 01:22, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, yeah. Just the main body and tail. <span style="">1:26 Sun Nov 1

Could you brighten up the white patch? Great job! 02:56, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! 03:36, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little more 06:51, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on the leg closest to us less...unnatural? Stripes don't go that way 11:19, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:01, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 00:08, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you explain in what way please. Does he need the base colour and stripes darkened to match the other images or do I need to darken the shading? 00:18, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot more; if you're not using pure white, I suggest it. Also, the stripes are much thinner on his MC... I'd say no more than two pixels wide, at the most. Many of these are much larger.

There are more y stripes on this image than there are on his mc, and the stripes are darker on the mc. 12:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:18, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes some more. 02:01, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 02:48, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

make the stripes more "pointy" and smudge the white more 13:24, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:51, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be darker. Are you picking it off from the mc image? And define them some more. 01:01, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 20:54, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

white is still too gray and needs to be smudged more 00:07, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm not too sure about that. It's brighter than Pebbleheart's other images, considering it's supposed to have shading a little over it. It's also more blurred than the other images too. 01:41, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes more. Also, I'm sorry, but I colorpicked from more images. Your stripe color is 3b3b3b, while Pebbleheart's MC is 1c1c1c. Can you please fix that? 02:34, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:08, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define his stripes. they look too blurred. 03:46, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Nettle (ES) For Approval
I was so lazy on this haha... 01:22, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the legs? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:40, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

expand it more 00:07, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Micah (Star) ~ CBA
Best cat 2015 Pls Micah is my favorite I want all his images 00:04, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes- the color looks kinda flat.

reups 12:42, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

reups again 12:48, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

.-. 12:53, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

reups made him pale 15:52, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading depth. 10:50, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly. I really only came here to tell yo how gorgeous this is and I really need a comfort after reading MFV and Micah's charart is my comfort 09:14, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you, Sagestream but /please/ do not comment with non criticism, it is against the rules. I will upload when i get up 12:47, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups 01:00, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 02:12, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Yew Tail (ES) ~ For Approval
So when I heard his description, this is what I thought of. I may have left something out, as the book isn't released where I am. Comments? 00:45, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading and maybe expand it some more? 00:57, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. 03:38, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and could you possibly smudge where the brown and cream meet? Given that you've made him long-furred, I think the transitions could be a bit more smudgey.

Reuploaded. 14:01, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a lot more 14:08, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't smooth out the shading any more. 14:56, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

What are you using to smooth out your shading with? Is it a stronger or weaker tool..? and for that matter, what program are you using? I know certain ones do restrict you, and Pixlr was infamous for doing this... If you're using GIMP, though, I suggest raising the power on your blur tool. If you're using Photoshop, then I know your blur tool can do much more than that. Or, if you'd rather not do that, why not try lowering the opacity of the shading on the cream? It's pretty good on the brown, but looks a bit too dark on the cream.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the help. 15:27, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Remove some of the shading above the back leg and on the front leg. 22:35, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:48, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

i think what ravenpelt was trying to say is that there should be no shading on the back at all 01:25, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

define the depth of the shading. 10:48, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:37, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

I still stand to say it could be smoothed out a lot more 12:49, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is hideous. 15:58, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the front of the body, head/legs/chest? 01:03, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blue Whisker (Q) ~ CBA
A queen image! 01:40, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the white more...white on her main body? 01:42, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did other stuff too 01:53, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Redone the old one irritated me so I redid it and I'm much happier. 11:19, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the white more visible? I cant hardly see any and she's supposed to be yellow-and-white 12:40, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added more white 12:47, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 14:56, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (ES) ~ For Approval
Honey honey honey honey bae sweetie sweetie rules

Lighten the shading a bit.. imo, I think it clashes a bit too much with the pelt.

Hes said to look exactly like his father. Would you like the file? 06:02, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

You need to cite that, Winter. All I saw was that he has the same color stripes and fur color as his father. That does not mean they look alike.

http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Honey_Pelt?diff=1017153&oldid=1016728 12:49, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Where did you get the information? All it says is that you added it to his trivia.

uh, the book? 02:15, November 5, 2015 (UTC) Yea I saw it :P I'll redo the thing hopefully after school tomorrow

Apple Blossom (Ki) - For Approval
so cute.

Re-uploaded. Accidentally used male blank and also got rid of a speck of white waste.

This is great ;0; Maybe smudge the ear pink a little? Sagestream (talk) 06:01, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Re-uploaded again as I played with the base and white.

Define the tail and facial shading. Everytime I see the name, I read it as "apple bloom" by accident. mlp has taken over my brain. =P 01:08, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, define the shading in general and the light source on the tail tip. (Unless that's what you meant to prior comment.) 04:42, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Shading can still be defined more. 03:45, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Mothflight (Q) - For Approval
Before you go jumping in saying the colors don't match, keep in mind that the base is color picked off her other images. Also, before you go complaining about the texture, that isn't texture- it's shading. Any who, comment away. 12:07, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I posted a wrong version where the base was yellowish. 12:16, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

yknow i dont really argue against tints, but this is making her look cream. 13:09, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, desaturate the shading, the rest of her images aren't this yellow. 22:46, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

please try not to repeat comments ravenpelt 01:28, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Why is yellow tint so annoying :( now it shouldn't look cream. It's been darkened so you can see the contrast better. 04:00, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

She still looks cream. 04:41, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:46, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks cream... you may need to actually change your tint color, as I told you on skype. If it distorts the coloring to the point it doesn't match the other images, then you should change it.

Re-uploaded 11:49, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

It's still way too yellow. I'm sorry, but it has to look close to the other images. I made you a quick example on what you can do to fix it. (Excuse the eye and ear color in the example) Example  16:42, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Friendly reminder that shading tint doesn't have to match, if that's what you meant with 'it has to look close to the other images.' 22:44, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenpelt, I see what you are saying, but tint doesn't have to match. 23:20, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

It still should look somewhat close to the original image. The tint difference in this case is night and day, it's too different to work. 00:22, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

You can still tell it's white thou O.o 00:23, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe just desaturate the shading a little? <span style="">0:32 Fri Nov 6

if i desaturate it it'll look even more yellow, so I'm gonna darken it. 02:14, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded a few things i wanna pint out: the /colors/ have to match, not the tint. in this case she /does/ match in terms of that. A cat in different lightening situations can look totally different. 02:17, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

if the tint is affecting the colour of the image to the point of it looking a different colour, it has to be changed. you dont get an option on that, because it no longer matches the description. 05:21, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

"no longer matches the description"? She's /white/, her base is color picked from the other images, and that's what the color is. The shading extends merely to the belly, and nowhere else. This doesn't look cream, the tint isn't even yellow anymore and I think you need your monitor fixed. besides, "you dont get an option on that" i can make my tint however i want it to be, and this /does/ look completely white. Just because the tint isn't blue doesn't mean she's not white. >.> 05:56, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

oh for gods sake i KNOW you can have ypour tint as whatever, but you cant have it as a certain tint if its affecting the colour. and im not the only one complaining about it being too yellow, so what the hell are YOU talking about? you flat out dont get an option if its affecting the image that badly, and have to change it around a bit. but whatever argue because you think youre top shit or something and get so offended over it looking a bit too yellow. 06:01, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

oh so i get called "top shit" because my monitor shows a pure white cat with a dark yellow tint. i think it's white and that's not even a poor excuse for you to be rude and swear all over the place just because you're pissed off because i didn't change the tint. ffs if you want me to change the tint you can leave out the rude comments and the swearing, thanks. 06:06, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Black Ear (ES) ~ CBA
i waaaas made for loooovin u baby (ok ill stop) 17:37, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Rock n' roll kitty. A little waste under the far right paw, above his tail and on the right side of his neck and head. 17:39, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

nice nice nice. Can you define the shading on the cheek a little? 01:00, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

With this light source i think the shading on the ride side of the legs could be expanded. 04:20, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded im not expanding it anymore now, its fine and people will start complaining he looks pink next. 11:31, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

At least you should thin out the shading on the left side of the legs, cause it's causing the light to look a bit... sourceless and she shading too expanded everywhere. 12:06, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

its the exact same source i used for bee. its above him, thats why both sides have shading. 12:09, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 02:30, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

not all shading works for every image 02:34, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

dont try and twist what i said onto me. its fine, otherwise you would have said something on bee. ._. 05:15, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not gonna enforce you to do anything, just popping in here and saying even if it had been approved, i doubt that it would work 100% on another image. 09:58, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

ok but....im not changing it when literally no one protested against bees. simple. i can edit the pattern so it doesnt look as strange but thats all im doing. 17:47, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

No. It doesn't look strange, it looks fine, and you shouldn't have to change it if you did the same thing on Bee. Re-CBA.

Hazel Burrow (K) - For Approval
I am determined to do art for all the BlogClan-named cats. Mwahahahaha. >:) But yeah, pretty happy with this. I tried to give him Hazel's white legs and hazel eyes from his BlogClan description, since it works with his canon description. Trying to make eyes that tiny hazel was a challenge. XD Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:44, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the patches more? 04:50, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:33, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

-holds Raven Pelt Too late muahaha   Make the ears just a tad pinker, they look too grey-brown. 16:20, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also made the black patches darker, and tweaked the shading to let the white show up better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:39, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (ES) ~ For Approval
Ugly shading is ugly, I will be redoing it >.> 16:00, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the ear pink easier to see? I legitimately cannot tell she has it.

Slides in and says, I can see it just fine ~russettail13

just because you can doesnt mean everyone else can. 16:14, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded I darkened it a bit and redid the shading. The original ear pink was referenced off photos of two of my cats, who are white, and they have hardly visible pink. 16:18, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

the shading or whatever is also making the white look cream. 16:33, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:47, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the patches and smooth out the shading some more please 12:52, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 13:39, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Rocky (ES) ~ For Approval
I will tweak the shading,or change the tint next upload 16:28, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Ok,i changed a lots of things XD 20:58, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:29, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading texure, especially on the legs. I love what your going for, but it looks more like splotches than fur. 16:47, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the tail? <span style="">22:55 Thu Nov 5

Mothflight (ES) ~ For Approval
moth flight is my baby -- 21:55, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

i know pupil placement is artists choice but its literally making her look crosseyed rn xD 00:00, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. hurp-a-durp -- 02:32, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is too yellow, it should match the other art. Here's an example I made for the WIP Queen art, try something like this. Example  16:44, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That hue change, though. -- 16:48, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Volestar (Star) - For Approval
vole is a funny word <span style="">02:10 Thu Nov 5

define the shading on the belly 02:12, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Spider Paw (ES) ~ For Approval
Would he need the extra toe on this blank? I'm not sure. 17:42, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

if you can fit it in i'd say go ahead, especially because he's named for it. 17:48, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Dusk Nose (Kit) ~ For Approval
My first kit and tortoiseshell! :D With the tortoiseshell and white debate going on, I gave her a creamy chest instead of white. I hope that's okay with the standards. I'm somewhat proud of this, but it definitely needs some sort of improvement. Anyways, enough with the talking and comment away! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:56, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Add some orange like her description says so. This is nice!--Dewsplash (talk) 02:02, November 6, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 02:02, Novembet, 6, 2015

She shouldn't have a creamy chest. She's only black and orange. 03:45, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the darker areas? It's kinda hard to decipher the black from the shading. <span style="">03:47 Fri Nov 6

Reuploaded Thanks Dew! I added orange, dulled down the pale chest and defined the shading. Hopefully this looks better. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 05:59, November 6, 2015 (UTC)