Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 4

Bluestar (W) - Redone
So, I re-did the image, and I am sorry, but I do not know who made the image before. I wasn't sure if I should add the scar, so please tell me if I should. εСћб ђэάѓτ  11:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

i think should not cause was it seen on her leader or older warrior image? otherwise this is really good apart from the shading under the neck that i think is supposed to be there but i dont know  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 12:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading, ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I darkened the shading and blurred the highlights. εСћб ђэάѓτ  16:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but perhaps make the ear pink a bit bigger? insane brick'd 16:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto insane. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made ear pink bigger. How's it now? εСћб ђэάѓτ  17:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading needs serious blurring. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   18:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Is it okay? εСћб ђэάѓτ  18:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. The blue is a little dark--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit, she looks very dark compared to her other images Night  Fall 18:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

She's supposed to have a silver tinged muzzle and tail tip.XxdovesongXX 07:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

She only had the silver muzzle and tipped tail because she was getting old. I don't think it's needed on her warrior image, because she is still young--  Night s h i n e    ~  07:21, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made her lighter. εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading the back leg. ♥Ice shine★  15:59, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It could still be lightened more. I think the colour should be similar to her kit and apprentice images--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:30, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit too bright, try desaturating it some Night  Fall 17:10, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad, and make the muzzle silver. Dawny  19:40, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add the silver tipped tail? Mõŏń    ۞   03:59, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was after she got old Night  Fall 06:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

blur haunch shading. ♥Ice shine★  14:52, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink just doesn't seem right for this colour pelt. Perhaps take it from another blue-ish cat with a more natural colour. Maybe Mistystar? -- Sandy star 19:56, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I changed the earpink to look more like Mistystar's, I blurred as much as I could, and I desaturated it. I didn't add the silver tipped muzzle and tail because that was when she got older. εСћб ђэάѓτ  12:32, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

She's should be more of a gray color. Darkhallows... Mew? 18:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree with Shady; she needs to match the colour of her other images. Using the desaturate tool should do the trick and then redo the ear pink and eye colour. -- Sandy star 08:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Darken the shading ♥Ice  storm★  12:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree with Darhollows. Rubyblaze 19:01, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree as well, she looks very, very blue. It doesn't match her other images, really.XxdovesongXX 21:38, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is too blue, and very bad


 * Fluffybunnies, two things. 1] Please remember to sign with ~ . 2]'very bad' is not a helpful or constructive comment. If you think it is very bad then you need to give some help for the improvement of the image.
 * Echoheart, this image is not very bad at all, just follow the advice everyone has given. -- Sandy star 22:27, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy, Echo; I think your shading technique is absolutely beautiful Night  Fall 23:50, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Fluffybunnies, this this art is not bad, and believe it or not, some cats actually are blue like this. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 09:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Just do what is listed above and this will look great. I love your shading! --Willo wwh isp 16:11, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks to all of the people who said great things about my art :) Anyway, I tried to make it more gray, but I don't think it worked. Comments? εСћб  ђэάѓτ  17:29, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to desaturate it some more. Other then that it's lovely. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:26, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, maybe you should add a scar on her shoulder too. Or should that only be on her leader image? Night Fall 05:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

She seems a bit purple to me, I think you should add a silver tint to it. Just my opinion though. :] Frostheart  ♥  20:16, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think she seems very blue. But if that's what everyone is looking for, then I see nothing wrong with the colour of her pelt. But I do agree with the silver tint tip. Also, could I recommened a little shading on her head? Out of my way, Kittypet! I'm not in the mood! 20:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

No silver, I think just desaturating it would do the trick. =) W    a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   21:16, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to be gone for at least five days for vacation, so please don't decline if it's possible. εСћб ђэάѓτ  14:52, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Try using the sponge tool to desaturate it. If it makes it MORE saturated, then change it's settings to make sure it does saturate it. This is good, though! Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 16:12, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

As all that was needed was some simple desaturation on the pre-existing model, I've done so. I want to make sure that the best effort is given to get most of the images done before the Tweak Week ends. Is there anything else needing to be done? --Bram ble 23:33, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her some. She's a bit dark. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:36, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

She's still much bluer than her other images. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 00:05, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturated and lightened some more. She is now the exact shade of the leader version. --Bram ble 17:21, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandy star 18:43, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bram ble 02:56, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Redone


Ended up having to redo this one as there was no way to save the shading. The original version was made by Sparrowsong. I made it as similar as I could to the last one, added adequate shading and highlights, and added a stripe on the face. Further suggestions? --Bram ble 01:11, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good! Maybe blur the shading on the leg. =) W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   02:19, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't know which leg you meant, so I just did them both. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 02:29, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add the scar on his flank? You don't need to; we could just say it's on the other side :D Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  02:31, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I know he's described as 'golden brown' in the allegiances and a few times in the series, but he's been described as ginger a lot more; should we maybe make his image ginger instead of golden brown? Night Fall 22:55, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

It's awesome, Bramble! I think you should add a scar to the flank, and add some more stripes to the tail. ♥Ice storm★  02:23, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe saturate it a bit to go with his other description? A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  16:53, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

I've added a scar on his flank and more stripes to the tail. I will not make him ginger, as his offical description is golden-brown, plus his other ranks would then be inconsistent in color. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 17:10, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Sandy star 18:48, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 02:56, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC) - Tweaked
The original artist was Shady, and it was nominated for too much shading. I also got rid of some blurred lineart. Comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 01:05, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tiny bit  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 01:32, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten ear pink. ♥Ice storm★  02:00, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did I darken the shading too much?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 15:37, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nope its ok :)  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:09, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it's just my computer, but it looks like the shading around the legs need a little bit more blurring :D <font color="981f1f" style="background:Gold">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> Just stick with the script... 19:51, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think that it made too much of a difference, but I blurred the shading on the legs.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 20:59, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my... my first kit Dx. Maybe add tail shading? Darkhallows... Mew? 03:59, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 19:57, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Improvement completed. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 02:56, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Snowfur (Ki)-Tweaked
Original artist is Spottedsky27. I redid the shading and fixed some blurred lineart. Comments? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  16:24, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

There is still some blurred lineart around the neck area. Great job! A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  17:09, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Mouse but theres no blurred lineart. I checked unless i'm going blind. Ashshadow Ag 17:19, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Hm. . . maybe I'm going blind! XD A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  21:36, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Mabye define the gray on the ears more i can barley see it. Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!

Is anyone else having trouble seeing it because I can see it just fine. Ashshadow Ag 17:16, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Well i mean darken it, it looks very very pale Mossy   I fight to live I live to fight!

Like I said it looks fine to me. Does anyone else have a problem with it? Ashshadow Ag 17:28, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's KIND OF too light. Maybe make it a tad darker? Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  22:17, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think the color of the gray is fine, as it's the same color as the gray on the ears of the other images.  I  c y   :)  I  s e e  smile ! 23:02, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

The gray color is fine. Improvement completed. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 02:56, July 26, 2010 (UTC)