Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 121

Scarlet (KP) - Approved
meh kitteh c: 03:57, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Purrty c: 06:20, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

You wouldn't mind shrinking the shoulder high light a bit? its a bit too big right now. 21:23 Fri Aug 29 2014

Re-uploaded 02:09, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit more? Yay, Scarly got Scarlet after all ^^

Re-uploaded I wanted her to be a bit more… scarlety… changes 03:22, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the collar shading. And maybe a bit more depth to the rest of the shading. Looks pretty:) 13:54, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:08, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved. 21:16, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blackstar (Star) - Approved
-many tears shed- Comments? -Feather 20:11, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Update- removed some waste. -Feather 20:19, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is really awesome, love it, although could you give more shape to the chest and the back? 21:28, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink a bit more. Also, can you define the chest and tail shading a bit? oh my starclan my little baby died ;-;    Brick  21:52, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

His paws aren't that smudged on his other images.

Re-uploaded.

Doesn't he need scars and patchy fur?It never said that he "repaired" when he went to Starclan. SziriXxX (talk) 14:44, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

It states here that StarClan cats recover from their wounds.

Oh,i didn't noticed that :) SziriXxX (talk) 15:24, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't he still have a patchy pelt though? Patchy fur isn't necessarily a wound, and I haven't seen any confirmation that cats go to StarClan in their best appearance, just with healed wounds. Brick 09:22, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

I have no problem adding patchy fur in, but I honestly think StarClan cats would be rid of it. 09:47, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

It appears that he hasn't had the patchy fur all of his life, so I think it's fine. 1:26 PM, Mon Sep 1, 2014

It's considered a "wound", or something detrimental to the character, and most patchy fur is caused by fighting. I say it's fine as it is.

Define tail and facial shading (and belly unless it's intentional.) 10:51 PM, Mon Sep 1, 2014

Even if it's intentionally like that, I can't see it, Rocket. So, Fez, dearest, define the belly shading as well. 02:23, 09/2/2014

Re-uploaded. 17:14, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define it a liiiitle more? 20:16, 09/4/2014

Re-uploaded. When I darkened the facial shading, it didn't look right at all, and to be honest I think it's fine as it is ouo. 19:39, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

This looks amazing, so CBA? 20:56 Fri Sep 5

Approved. 21:16, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Jessy (KP) ~ Approved
Alright, I'm not sure how satisfied I am with this, but...comments? 21:17, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and define the light on the tail 01:30, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:43, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps make the eyes brighter? They seem rather dull.

Re-uploaded Decided to redo the eyes entirely. 23:07, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

The pupils look slightly... derped. They look like their going off slightly in different directions. Brick 13:58, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

They look fine to me, but if someone else agrees with you, I'll change them. 14:02, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe just move one pupil one pixel over. 14:14 Mon Sep 1

Please don't use "derp" like that, Trunktail. Some could consider that offensive, and offending people is the last thing we aim to do. Using "cross-eyed" or another term like that, is preferred.

Re-uploaded. Changed the style around completely- hopefully this looks better. 21:05, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

define the head shading a tad? 00:07, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:21, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Looks a little green... Try tinting the shading red-brown/red? 22:26, 09/2/2014

She doesn't look green to me. The shading appears to be tinted a dark brown.

Hmm, no other comments for a while... shall we go CBA?

Approved. 21:16, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Morningflower (Q) ~ Approved
This should keep me busy for some time. Comments? 01:34, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Looking at the other images, I think the lighter parts should be a bit smaller, and the markings blurred more, but other than that it looks really good. :) I really like the shading. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:01, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Which lighter parts are you talking about? The white or the pale markings? 03:04, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

The pale markings, sorry. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:05, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 14:23, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the markings more. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:34, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 17:38, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Blur those markings even more- they appear blend a bit more on the elder.

re-up 16:15, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

A bit more light around the head and rump--Crowpool (talk) 13:44, September 4, 2014 (UTC)

With this light source, there wouldn't be as much light, Crow, so I think it's fine. (btw, your comment should be under mine, next time.) 18:13, September 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tortoiseshell some. It's fine on the white parts. This is beautiful. 1:07 Fri Sep 5

re-up  18:54, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? I think it's perfect. 20:57 Fri Sep 5

Approved. 21:16, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Lakeheart (W) ~ Approved
Beep beep. Comments? 00:17, September 3, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lower the opacity/darken the pale parts just a bit? It looks almost white.

re-up 00:39, September 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink; I have to squint and put the laptop super close to my face in order to see it. Also, define the light on the tail.

re-up 18:32, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Preeetty. 21:01 Fri Sep 5

Approved. 21:16, September 6, 2014 (UTC)