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Sandgorse (T)~ For Approval
I dont know if I like the fluff tuffs or not. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:12, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Friendly reminder not to thumb your images! Reduce the pale parts on the tail, belly, chest and muzzle. For the first three, the paler parts are very thin and don't creep onto the main body very much. On the muzzle, reduce the pale parts so it doesn't reach the eyes or cheeks. 20:38, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink looks really light compared to his other images. Color pick from either of his previous images to get the correct color. Also, in addition to what Vec said, there needs to be some more stripes. 20:47, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

This needs to be renamed File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png. You are missing a letter in the file name. Also, put some bare skin on where the tufts are, being described with patchy fur means missing fur, which shows skin. If you need reference look at File:Sandgorse.star.png.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, the "T" in tunneler doesn't need to be uppercase.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:59, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re~Up Okay, and I want to know, should I edit the positioning and or the shape of the fluff tuffs? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:11, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

You probably should try to match the StarClan one. Did you dethumb this? Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Also, this looks a little darker than his other images. Maybe ask Jayce for the base color if you get stuck.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:21, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Potato Flakin, I am trying to make it mach the warrior blank, because that is how it works, do the first one, not a later one, and it is dethumbed Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:42, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

In regards to the fur tufts, make them a little shorter and smaller, if that makes sense. More, you know, tufty ^^ Also, add a little pink (the ear pink color is fine) right underneath each tuft to mimic the exposed skin. 21:45, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re~Oops, fixed the fluff tuffs, I seem to like them now, and lowered the shading opacsity Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:00, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

I did both of Sandgorse's other images. The StarClan has more of the side you need to match than the warrior does. ​​​​​​

In terms of placement, the pale parts on the belly and paws need to be receded 22:56, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

There's a little waste around the ear and fur patches on the hind legs, I believe some near tip of the tail. He generally seems much duller to me, the stripes seem to be much thicker here than his other images, there should be more stripes, The pale on the face extends too far across the cheek, The pale parts of the paws does not extend as far up here as on his other images, The pale on the chest and belly should be reduced a considerable amount. The pink to show the skin where the patchy fur is is also a fairly different color here, than on his other images, and this seems a little nitpicky, I thought I'd mention it. SquidwardPlays 23:04, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Also, your image was aligned to the left. don't do that. SquidwardPlays 23:05, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

You've improved so much Owlbite! Can you add some depth to his skin patches? —

I can't see any shading through my screen. might be just me? -- Silverfur   skz  [ 09:31, 12/10/2018 ]

I dont get what you mean by, aligned to the left, and on the other 2, the patchy fur was a difrent color, I am not working on my computer,  so I cant work now, but I can fix the problems! (Please call me TrasH, I am more used to that and was questioning who you were talking about!) Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

You forgot to sign! Please thin out the stripes (this was said in a comment above, not sure if you saw it). The stripes are thinner on his Warrior and StarClan.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:27, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

I agree, the stripes should be thinner and there should be more stripes added to the body. Minkclaw You're my person 22:32, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, the hyphen in the file name needs to be a colon. Please lighten him up (I said this in a comment). The stripes need to be orange. Right now they're goldenrod (not sure how else to describe them). Don't forget adding depth to the skin, Echo mentioned that. Potato Flakin (talk) 22:40, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

I never said I wouldent do that, please stop repeting things that have already been said. I was typeing thet while walking to school, and didnt have time to sign it, I was at school and they emphisise no phones. and last time I did art, I used ~ and was fine, can I get a second opinion on if I should change it? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

Potato, you need to stop. You've been told multiple times about your conduct. Please give Owl a chance to respond before you repeat comments. Anyways, back to the image. Owl, I renamed it for you, since it needs to be  File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png  in order for it to work on the article. ​​​​​

I..owe an apology to you Owlbite. I have been forcing you to rush, and I felt humiliated when I learned what I was doing- I am so so SO sorry for so many things. I often have problems controlling my emotions, so please take your time with Sandgorse. Feel free to ignore me being nitpicky..Potato Flakin (talk) 04:11, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the fur a little off from the rest of his images, and aren't the stripes sharper? Malina457 (talk) 17:05, December 12, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Alright, it's been a while since this has been uploaded. Owl, are you still working on this? You have one week from your upload date (which was the 9th) to reupload, which means you have until the 16th to do so.

Pebble (CG) - For Approval
i was bored so i did another charart, and nobody else was doing her, so eh, why not. Not nearly the best i can do though, it feels kind of lackluster, especially the mud. If anyone agrees that i should fix the mud, i'll probably mess around with it then, since i'm not too happy with it anyway. SquidwardPlays 01:07, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

I think this looks good! There's shading leaking away from the lower haunch shading. 01:16, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Messed around with the mud, I'm much happier with it. also touched up lower haunch shading. SquidwardPlays 01:30, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define the face/head shading. 03:09, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reups SquidwardPlays 03:16, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front limbs and chest? 15:46, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the back and tail look overly dark compared to the shading on the rest of the image. Try to even out the darkness. 17:44, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reups SquidwardPlays 22:10, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Kill the waste outside the back.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:30, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

For reference. ^ —

Reups SquidwardPlays 02:02, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the body seems very dark compared to the shading on the chest and head. It might be my screen's saturation, but can you even out the depth of the shading to match the entire body? —

Reups SquidwardPlays 22:46, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

The back waste has returned, kill it.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:31, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

Reference again, lmao. —

Define the shading depth along the back?

16:48, December 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Sorry for the delay on this. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 23:07, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

The mud appears to be darker on the to-be.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:01, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I don't think the mud has to match. I will do nothing with the mud unless someone agrees. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:06, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

It's true, the mud does not have to match. It is artist's choice, much like the shading. 03:47, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

There's still some shading leaking on the haunch from the tail. 03:54, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reups No idea if i got it or not but i guess i'll see now <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:57, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Extremely minor, but could you please crop this image to the lineart on -> side of the image. There's a few extra pixels of length that aren't necessary.

Lilywhisker (T) ~ For Approval
it's really bad ik I'll fix it later

Can you define the texture and smooth out the shading? It looks lovely! —

There's a out-of-place pixel on the tail tip that needs to be filled in. Also, did you fill in the nosepink? Right now it is looking like it's the pelt color. Good work Star!Potato Flakin (talk) 03:18, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is leaking along the belly. 03:54, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading darkness a bit? 14:26, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

I'll reupload later, and Vec, can you point out where the shading is leaking?

Snowed brought this up on other images, but could you fill in that missing black pixel on the tail tip? :) Sorry I didn’t see Potato's comment! 00:14, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Vec said shading was leaking along the belly, which it is. It's also leaking onto the tail. And what is that spot of shading near the shoulder? Is that part of the light source?Potato Flakin (talk) 00:55, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

it's very faint and that is where I believe the leaking is, though I did state my original statement when I was very sleep deprived whoops 02:04, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (UN) ~ For Approval
hey guys, this was hard and my hands must rest but here is my art. all colors picked from the warrior, pattern done from the warrior side. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    08:36, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

This is gorgeous!! Can you lighten/define the face and neck shading and also smooth out the flecks a bit more on her chest? They seem to stop abruptly. —

Maybe add some white flecks on top of the brown ones. This was done with a specific brush originally, and the layers alternate between colored layers on overlay and multiply, and white. <span style="">14:01 Fri Dec 14

Alright, several things. One, there's tiny specks of waste floating around the character, two, lower the opacity of the shading on the paws, they are almost gray. Three, you didn't fill in the nose, and four, make the placement of the speckles on the chest more natural. They are a straight line right now. Otherwise than that lovely job!Potato Flakin (talk) 14:19, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it looks completely black on her white fur. I absolutely love the speckles, and you did so well with such a challenging design!! 14:28, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading in the <-- ear and eye, along with by the tail tip.

16:22, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, Could you possibly redline what you mean, Sun? I'm not sure if the white i just added is good enough but yeah. As from what I was seeing the flecks/speckles match the warrior which I believe I'm suppose to be matching that one's pattern. Also the shading is black, Potato when you mention waste can you possibly say where it is instead of just telling me there's waste as it's sometime very hard to spot waste. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    22:06, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

The speckles on the foreleg closest to us also stop too abruptly as well. On the mentioned leg, it looks more like they got erased and left like that. Not to say that was what occurred, but it is how it appears. If that makes any sense. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:28, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shafing depth.

23:00, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Yes the shading depth is a must, and the waste is outside the chest, back, tail and belly.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:57, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I know the shading depth is a must, Patch already pointes that out. Can you point out where because I don't see it. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    01:04, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I believe Potato is talking about this. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:09, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I think expanding the shading will also help on the main body and hind leg. 02:07, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Please crop the image to the lineart on all sides. ​​

I'm not exactly sure how to crop. Should I be croppinv the image if its fhe size from the wikis lineart? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    09:53, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not asking you to remove any of the lineart... it's just excess space that doesn't need to be there. I'm not asking you to distort your image or anything. =/ ​​

How would I crop it? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    17:08, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

There may be a arrow or something that allows you to shrink the border. Do you use GIMP? There is a cropping tool shaped like a square. There is some empty background that Jayce wants you to crop a little bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 17:16, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Plumclaw (T) - For Approval
02:59, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eyedepth a little bit. Lovely work Winterwhisper!Potato Flakin (talk) 03:16, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

ignore the eye depth thing stupid computersPotato Flakin (talk) 04:09, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Expand the shading some more, particularly on the haunch, belly, and shoulder/front leg. 04:12, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:48, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add some shading on the neck? This is lovely! —

Reuploaded. 06:06, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Just for curiosity's sake, is the shading tinted? I quite like what you have going on here. I just want to make sure that's what I'm seeing and it's not an error with my screen.

Yes it’s tinted with a dark red/maroon! :) 17:52, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded for faint highlights. 20:03, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Shattered Ice (T) - For Approval
This is definitely a different way of smudging from what I usually do. <span style="">20:21 Sat Dec 15

Can you expand the shading on the shoulder? —

Coreect me if I'm wrong but his gray markings seem softer on his other images but these are a bit sharp so maybe soften then a tad. —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  '''  21:04, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

They also seem a bit more feathered out, and smooth the shading on the front leg's elbow?

Scourge(UN)~ For Approval
I made this boi. It took a few days because when I was in the middle of making this my dad kicked me off only to play Conan Exiles. RainbowTheKittyPet (talk) 21:13, December 15, 2018 (UTC)RainbowTheKittyPetRainbowTheKittyPet (talk) 21:13, December 15, 2018 (UTC)