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Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120923200241!Shellyheart.png 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me.

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinx the power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.  Charlie  Let's   go to   Candy Mountain  02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

I couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows  call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/5/56/Giratina_orig.gif Crystals   over   Sparks  http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/2/27/Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. -- Đark ɦallows  06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? 20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on these? 00:44, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I am, I've just been having complications with it. My sincerest apologies :(  01:04, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front paws are still a bit too big, can you shrink them a bit? 19:37, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bump the closest eye up higher and smooth out the back. 20:32, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front left (my left) paw should be facing the front a bit more. It's on quite an awkward angle.  Millie  It's   all   black magic!  02:07, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The face looks...How do I put this? Flat-ishPikachushinx the power of the past 14:58, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, the face is fine. With the pose that it is in, the head would be angled that way, making the face appear that it looks kind of 'flattish'. 01:20, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 17:56, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm trying, I really am, the anatomy just frustrates me at times because at this angle, it's difficult to get perfect  02:51, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

The front paw on this<--- side is still at an awkward angle. Could you please fix that? :3 02:57 Thu Oct 25

I'm going to feel horrible for critiquing this, because I'm Horrid at cat anatomy, and I wouldn't be able to do any better. Also, if I repeat anything from up there^ I did Not mean to. I would remove the line on the back, the legs look too thick, the paws I don't think should be wider than the legs themselves, the tail is crooked, as is the back leg closest to us, and to me the neck looks to short. -- 18:08, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the back a little more and move the "foot" on the hind leg back a little. 00:28, October 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week with no update and over a month and a half since the initial upload... Sorry, Ivy, I know you're trying and your blank is cool, but I think someone else should finish this. Keep the pose but get it wrapped up. 16:23, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

I've really been trying, but with the redlines being so different and not entirely getting it, it's just been really difficult. I don't want to give this up, but I guess if the project agrees, I can send my file over to someone new. :/  19:02, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Well I've asked cloudy multiple times what would happen about time limits and such on this, and though an agreements never been made, but I personally think Ivy should have 2 months on this, and if it's not approved by then, someone else could take it, keeping the same pose. It's a blank, it should have a bit more time than normal images. However you would have to keep uploading it Ivy. I certainly wouldn't mind taking over, but I personally think Ivy should get until two months are up before it goes up for grabs to anyone, unless she chooses to withdraw it early for any reason. 05:37, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. Two months is good; twice as long as a normal charart. However, I think Ivy should choose who the blanks get passed off to, since they were hers. I also agree with keeping the same pose, since /that's/ why these blanks were picked.

Alright. Well, I did try and fix them up again, but I really need help on the paws. They are giving me the fits, no matter how much I re-shape them XD  01:32, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Try making them more round, especially the one that is off the ground. 21:33, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (Q) ~ For Approval
Her name, her description, mary-sue, in a good way <3 Comments? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:29, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller, and blur it 19:43, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

e.e I tried, stupid pixlr makes every bit of shading a hard time. When I blur it, it squares, when I change the size, it overlaps the sides. Ah, well, re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:51, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her face, please. =3 01:54, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I love the pattern, but it's unrealistic in the means that the design isn't formatted to the actual pelt of a cat. The pelt doesn't match up by bit and piece when the cat strikes a certain pose. All you need to do is shift a few pieces of the design like the legs, tail, and a tiny bit on the chest. Feel free to disagree though. 04:32, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, Teldy, but I'm inclined to disagree with this. I know a friend who had a cat with a similar pelt to this, and I think it is a possible pelt pattern, even though maybe slightly abnormal. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  10:14, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

What Teldy is talking about is that the pelt moves too perfectly. On the back legs, the pattern needs to be raised up. On the front legs, it need to be brought down, so that it looks more natural. Now the pattern looks like it just goes straight across; which is unnatural. 10:19 Fri Oct 12

Re-uploaded I changed the pelt style to make it more realistic :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:52, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The cream seems kinda pinkish. Was that intentional?

Yeah, the other cream colour I used didn't blend well, so I tried this one, and it looked slightly better. Also, I think if light catches it, it will reveal more creamy :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    16:17, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I think you'll need to change it. It looks skin-colored, and makes it seem like Rowanberry doesn't have cream and brown, but brown streaks of fur.

For a brown and cream cat, I was thinking something like either Molepaw or Ivystripe without the stripes (the forelegs and underbelly) or like a tortoiseshell. 16:33, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    17:30, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

She looks mottled, if you use pixlr, it's probably because of the blur tool, instead of using the blur tool, I'd suggest using the Gaussian Blur tool at a rate of ten. Also, the shading looks a bit hard-edged on her tail. By the way, this is beautiful. =D =3  22:02, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink 01:11, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the brown slightly darker because it looked a bit golden. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:08, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and fix the eyes and the earpink. 08:12 Sat Oct 13

The front leg closest to us, still looks mottled. 23:46, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can't see it mottled :s ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:11, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it. It's near the elbow. 21:17, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern still looks like it's been pasted on. It should curve and go with the body. o3o 00:11, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda gray on the cream. Maybe try and shade with dark brown instead of black 03:19, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shadig still looks hard-edged on her tail, can you blur it? x3 12:15, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:17, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, it looks a little bit paint-brushed on, still. 10:18 Thu Oct 18

Re-uploaded I've made it look more like the apprentice and I've darkened the brown. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    15:23, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes on the haunch connected. ^^  19:31, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    19:47, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it up a bit. 20:19, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten what up? o3o ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    11:57, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The entire image. It's a little too dark. .-.

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    15:09, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a bit gray right now... When Rowan said to lighten up the image, I believe she meant the colors(if I'm right), not really the image itself... (Hopefully you get what I'm saying, since I think I know what you did xD)  02:11, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is...lighter than it should be? o.O

Umm.. it looks black to me...? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:00, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's not black, it's an extremely dark grey. Please fix it. 08:15 Wed Oct 24

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  11:18, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, the colors really don't match her other images...

Darken and give the shading some depth and define the ear-pink 03:42, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Still working, Feathz? 15:42, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm just trying to figure out a way to do this. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  11:15, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry that took so long. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  13:32, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on her haunch match more? Right now they just look like squiggly lines. 13:59, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  18:06, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it still doesn't look like it matches on the haunch. Thin out the stripes more and make them curve a bit more. Also, with the middle stripe, make it curve in at the top. 13:02, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. This might take a short while. I'm going to experiment with this and ask for help. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  19:01, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (W) ~ For Approval
I know this needs work, but I'm proud of her. :D Comments? 20:41, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:42, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the earpink. It looks like the tan bit on her ear. 22:38, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I'd rather not change the earpink because I got it from an .xcf, but if anyone else agrees I'll change it. 20:31, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be more visible. 00:24, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want me to define it some more? 20:07, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be lighter to match. 18:22, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ 20:30, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern on the haunch doesn't really match the apprentice. Could you shift the brown down the leg a few pixels?

Re-Ups^ 20:31, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Pattern still needs to be shifted, this time on the opposite side of what you did on the last upload. It looks too neat, and matches with the rest of the pattern way too much to be considered natural.

Re-Ups 21:45, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? 04:59, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

When I said shift the pattern, I was talking about the larger amount of brown on her haunch. More towards the legs. It's /still/ too neat. Like this side of the haunch, not the other side.

Re-Ups^

Still needs to be shifted more, I think. Where the brown meets the black lineart on the haunch/leg/whatever. x.x It needs to be moved down a couple more pixels, I think. It /still/ looks too perfectly aligned.

The shading needs to be defined a lot more. 01:09, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

I feel awful, GIMP wasn't working. Sorry for the delay. Not sure about changes. 14:11, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 21:31, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yea, I uploaded when I edited that above ^_^ 21:33, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think the brown is /still/ too perfect on the haunch. It just seems like it connects too perfectly. Sorry for nailing you about this, Rowan. I like Rowanberry. x3

Nutwhisker (W) - For Approval
My first PCA work. I tried to match the kit art... Comments? 17:52, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Dawn, this is /wonderful/ for your first PCA image. I'm very impressed.

Holy... O.O this is excellent. Define the earpink more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:26, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the texture a little and define the haunch shading. ^^ If you use GIMP, I can give you the xcf or if not, I can give you the exact colours I used. 22:39, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Improved?''' Thanks for the compliments. ^^ I do use GIMP, so that would be great help. (Although I probably should have asked from the beginning, heh...) 17:10, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the entire image and in between the legs. 22:17, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. I can hardly see the depth. 14:37, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Improved? 18:29, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but the paw shading needs to be thinner and you need to lighten the belly/chest shading and the midriff shading. 19:13, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Improved? 16:06, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad, and I think I will CBA this. c: 18:48, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:39, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more, especially in the back and neck, I'm having trouble distinguishing the texture in those areas. x3 This is beautiful! 20:01, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. ^^ 20:48, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

A lovely first image. CBA? 23:50, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I just thimk the shading is much too dark and the colour doesn't quote match properly. 10:41, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'll try redoing the colors to match the kit's more. Should be up by tomorrow. 17:58, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I did say should. >.< Is it better now? 17:46, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add a few more streaks of dark brown to the shoulder area 04:07, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? 18:20, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, it's nearly pure blank in a couple spots, and sharpen and thin out the streaks, and maybe lighten them too, he looks mottled right now. 19:50, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded! 17:43, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. S'looking good. 23:26, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The difference isn't showing as much as I'd like though. 14:03, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchwind (K) ~ For Approval
Well...I tried. x.x -- 18:00, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 18:01, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 18:09, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 07:35, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might now be showing -- 14:57, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten him up a bit to match the warrior? 20:38, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 03:47, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes- apologies. Reuploaded -- 15:07, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 15:49, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

He still needs to be lightened up a bit more. 11:06, October 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? 14:00, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

This is declined due to lack of work. I'll take over from here.

Re-uploaded. Wee~ I love his name. <3 Soooo, what'cha think? 8D

Blur the stripes and earpink a tad. This is amazing Cloudy. =) 22:45, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'd rather not touch the ear pink, since it's difficult enough to see on the kit blanks as it is.

Nutwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
First charat as a warrior~ Anyways, Skt helped me with this a lot last night, comments? 21:40, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the kit a bit more with the texture. Other tan that, great job! =D 21:48, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

You can just move one of the texture layers around a bit more and maybe mess around with the opacity. ^^ 23:06, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded First charart as a warrior and I don't spell charart right...x.x. Anyways, I think I made it worse..... 12:46, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

No, you didn't, Shoon. Just define the depth in the shading a tad. 18:57, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Great job, Lemony. But this more like a tabby. It needs to match more.--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 21:56, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93

Still working on this, Moon? 14:44, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I am. I'm sorry for not uploading. I've been swarmed with work and sports and stuff, and as most of you guys know, I twisted my ankle and it's been really hard. I know it's not really much of an excuse but...I should have it up by tomorrow. 00:39, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- I smudged the stripes a bit, I think it looks better. I played around with the shading, but I don't think I made much of a difference.... 20:05, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and thicken(sorry if that doesn't make sense xD) the texture. 21:14, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Are you using motion blur? Because if you are, I suggest that you don't. Use the smudging tool ouo. 06:22 Mon Nov 5

GIMP keeps crashing on me. It won't let me open it. I'm trying to fix it, and I'm really sorry for the delay. 21:15, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (Alt W)- Under Evaluation
Tried my best with that shading :P. Comments? Bbun (talk) 01:21, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading. 01:22, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bbun (talk) 01:31, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur it some more and lighten the legs a little. 02:14, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong; but doesn't this need scars? 12:08 Tue Oct 23

Nope it doesn't, as he was mentioned as scarred in Into the Wild and this alt is from Yellowfang's Secret. 12:17, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ignore the waste in the backround, I'll remove them if that's the only thing I need to fix left Bbun (talk) 18:52, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading on the tip of the tail and lighten the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  вαʐïṉģα   19:01, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope the changes are showing :P Bbun (talk) 19:27, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The file needs to be File:Clawface.warrior.alt.png.

You mean to be renamed or to be changed? Also I don't know how to "define" the tail tip so I'll leave it at that until more people complain. I'm focusing mainly on the waste now. Bbun (talk) 19:34, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There's some waste by his closest ear, his tail, and his paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Halloween!  20:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

When you define the tail tip's shading, you make it more visible. But I agree with Feather, it needs to be defined. 21:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

So where do I put the tail tip shading? And I already know about the waste. So that means I blur the tail tip shading along with the rest of the body? Bbun (talk) 21:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Do you have shading on the tail tip? Looking at it looks like there isn't any, so you could add it, Just make sure they are moth blurred equally. /hope this makes sense /horrible at explaining things. 23:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried at doing the tail shading. Ignore the waste- I'll clean it up later. Bbun (talk) 23:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Please change the file name to what I asked you earlier. You can ask 'Teldy to change it for you if need be.

Re-uploaded Teldy already fixed it, and tell me if the wasteless pic is showing. Bbun (talk) 23:46, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Can you connect the tail tip shading with the rest of the tail shading? It looks out of place with a blotch of unshaded fur. Oh, and I believe I see just a bit of waste near his tail tip. 01:17, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed tail shading and waste. Bbun (talk) 01:29, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

I see waste by the tail. 15:59, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if the new changes are showing. Bbun (talk) 18:19, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There is still waste around the entire image. 18:39, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, this is at least the third time I've asked you. Use this file to upload your image. We follow a naming scheme here, and you need to follow it.

Fixed, I think. Bbun (talk) 19:14, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

No, still not fixed. Make sure to put all of the periods in. Also, there is waste all around the image, I believe. 20:27, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know how to make it file. Removed the waste. Bbun (talk) 22:27, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Cloudy told you how to do it... Define the leg shading a bit. 23:03, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail 23:32, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if there's any tail waste still showing. I uploaded this picture on the link Cloudy showed me. If there's anymore mistakes on this and if its uploaded wrong again, I'll upload it on the link she showed me. Bbun (talk) 16:55, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

It's still not right. Next time you save it as a .png on your computer, just make a copy with the correct name (Clawface.warrior.alt.png), and then make sure to change which image is up above. 18:07, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if the changes are showing. Bbun (talk) 18:53, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Yep. Could you blur and darken the shading a bit? 04:52, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bbun (talk) 20:10, October 29, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There is a part on the tail with a much darker, blotchy part. Blend that out or remove it altogether  15:49, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. 20:50, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I finally found the old .xcf again. Bbun (talk) 00:44, November 7, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur/blend the shading/highlights and it looks like the blob on the tail is still there.

Mothwing (E) ~ CBA
Uh, whoops. Sorry, accidentally ruined her :S Ah well, I tried x.x Oh, and I know I need to blur the stripes a bit a lot more, so I'll do that on the next reupload. 18:54, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match her existing pattern (her stripes do not branch off that much), I did not blur the stripes on her other chararts (I smudged them lightly, but that's it), add mottles, etc. If you want the original file for her MC charart just send me a message at neneshell@gmail.com. 19:20, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gah, I'll fix the dapples in the next upload. &gt;.&lt; 23:28, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a touch? 04:56, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes radiate straight from her spine toward her stomach. 05:02, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the dapples and the shading, and I think I fixed the stripes. 19:28, October 29, 2012 (UTC)

Shading needs defining. 00:04, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:54, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 20:20, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

This still doesn't quite match the other chararts. Define the dapples. There's a layer of dapples under her stripes and another layer on top of the, It does make a difference.And what I meant by my earlier comment was that her stripes radiate from her spine only. She has no stripes crossing her underside, save for her tail. Only her back. 20:43, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

I would blur the stripes around her rear leg a bit. And maybe define her earpink more :) 03:47, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

define the light source? 05:39, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, sorry for not reuploading yet. I'll probably do it by this afternoon/a bit later. 14:02, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -cringes- Redid the whole thing. 20:55, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes and a few of the dapples a tad and blue them (with the blur set very low) and you should be good. Sorry to drive you so hard, but Mothwing's one of my favourite chararts by me. 02:43, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't care if you're doing that, Shelly. I want this to match the other images as best as possible. (Though these dapples may be the death of me xD)  16:48, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a tiny bit more orange. 03:01, 08, 11, 2012

I'd rather not, since I got all of the colors from Shelly, but if anyone else agrees, I will. 14:44, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Asdf my computer is dumb (horray for phones) you don't have to. xD <span style="">14:58, 08, 11, 2012

This is neat. Shall we go CBA?

Brackenfur (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
lil ginger Brackenkit. :3 Comments?

Doesn&apos;t this have to match the apprentice alt? Or am I just mistaken o3o 11:36, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think so...Paleh&apos;s version before this didn&apos;t match. o3o <span style="">11:51 Wed Oct 31

Why does he have /white/ underparts? Shouldn't they be pale?

This is a tad bit on the neon ginger side, can you dull it a teeny bit? 15:47, October 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define/darken/redden the ear-pink 04:10, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just redid it xP Colours taken from this. <span style="">06:09 Fri Nov 2

I know you took the colors from that image but he looks really gold. Can you make him a bit redder? <span style="">20:56, 03, 11, 2012

Re-uploaded ...owo <span style="">11:01 Mon Nov 5

Define the shading a bit? 21:44, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded <span style="">05:31 Fri Nov 9

Russetfur (Ki) - CBA
Tried to make it match as best as I could :) And yes, I'm aware of the waste by her tail, and probably by the time you read this, I'll already have reuploaded this. 19:23, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes-- I can hardly see them. 19:25, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Dwawww... Meh lil' Russety! Bright/make the ear-pink a bit paler 21:05, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Colors taken from unshaded kittypet image, so they should be right, now! 06:42, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Heh. Little Russetfur. Comments before approval, anyone?

Leafstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors taken from leader image. Comments? 15:51, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Highlights were bothering me, so I got rid of them. 15:54, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job. :3 Define the shading. 15:57, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I figured this would be relatively easy; I just looked at the leader, since it's basically the same position. 16:07, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the right side, it makes the stripes and the earpink hard to see. x3 Wonderful job! 17:38, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Our right or hers? 18:21, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I assummed you were talking about our right. 18:26, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes a bit, to make it match her other images. 22:47, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:24, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchwind (A) - For Approval
Tabby guy! ^.^ ,17:23, November 6,2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes a bit to match the warrior. He's so purdy~ 17:29, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes thicker, too. Very beautiful. =) 17:37, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I also changed his colour slightly to match..but Its still not perfect anyway. ,20:08, November 6,2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match the warrior....like, in terms of style and all... (sorry for not elaborating, I can't think)

Dawncloud (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? <span style="">02:59, 08, 11, 2012

Can you blur the stripes the teeniest bit? 11:07, November 8, 2012 (UTC)