Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Kittypet Blanks - For Approval


I was messing around in the warriors wiki when I found many declined images so I put the Kittypet blanks for approval. Comments?--Yai-Girl 17:17, 20 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Yai, these are Darkhallows' images. You need her permission to edit them, and also, o, Sandiwolf was working on them; they were just taken down due to black of work. -- Bramble My Realm 21:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Oops sorry.--Yai-Girl 15:39, 21 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

These had best be declined then until Darkhallows gives her permission to use the old blanks and until you sort it out with Sandiwolf. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:21, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Yai-girl can use them. I have attempted to revamp them to no avail. Maybe she can.-- Darkhallows Lair 17:54, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Alright then, back up for approval. Sandiwolf's were declined, and if she wants them back up, she and Yai can talk it out. There is a chances that one set can be used as rogues and the other as kittypets. (will add criticism when I have time) -- Bramble My Realm 16:00, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Kittypets are well-groomed. The fur on the lond-hairs are sticking out everywhere. I thought you weren't supposed to put cats in drying machines? -- MU MB LE 785  23:48, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Mumble, long-hairs are fluffy, know matter how "well-groomed" they are. Maybe make the hair a tad bit closer to the pelt, though. I love the collars. :)--Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 00:23, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Now, the lineart needs to be thicker, so as it goes with the other images. Instead of the tail being up, it would be better if it was curled around the paws, I think, and the ears need to be shrunk. The paws look slightly awkward too. I found this pic: click You could probably use it for reference. -- Bramble My Realm 20:53, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with everything Bramble. That pic made me laugh though. I would advise you not to make them quite that fat Yai! Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:13, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, hey, they are kittypets. lol but yeah, don't make them that fat Yai. -- Bramble My Realm 23:44, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

I have trouble making the long hairs fluffy can someone help me?--Yai-Girl 14:28, 29 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Hre's another reference: <Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 16:23, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I did the short hairs, how do they look?--Yai-Girl 19:03, 30 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Looks great, but can you please make them a bit bigger? MaYbe the size of my Loner blanks on the bottom? Besides that I love them! The reason I want them to be bigger, is beacuse it's easier to add shading, blending, and smudging, and so we can see the colors and tabby stripes/dapple even better. Hawkfire ♫  Go Aggies! 22:33, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

How do you make the blanks bigger?--Yai-Girl 14:58, 31 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Oh erm.. I don't know. Maybe ask somebody who is good at the computer? I had to redo my loner blanks to make them bigger :( Hawkfire ♫  Go Aggies! 15:17, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I have a couple of things:


 * 1) They are a little small but I'm not sure how to make them bigger (Moss might know as she did it for her prey-hunters)
 * 2) There doesn't seem to be much difference between the longhaired and shorthaired - make it clearer which have longer fur
 * 3) The heads are a little strange - they seem really... angular and the eyes are really off centre which looks odd
 * 4) The lineart on the inside of a couple of them still needs to be thickened.

Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:54, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

I thickened the lineart on the long hairs.--Yai-Girl 21:16, 1 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I have a suggestion, try to make the tail on the longhears thicker so then we can tell the difference. --Spottedwing 16:46, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

thickened tails.--Yai-Girl 18:47, 2 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Here´s a diagram, I had no problems with it, but it´s a small like Hawkfire and Sandy said.--Yai-Girl 10:59, 4 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I don't know.... the style just doesn't seem right.... -- Dawnfeather talk! 09:52, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

What do you mean Dawn?--Yai-Girl 11:39, 6 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

They look rather cartoon-ish to me, and I honestly don't think they work very well. Please don't get me wrong - there is no offense intended, to either you, Yai-Girl, or Shady. -- Dawnfeather talk! 11:52, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

I can make them bigger, Yai, if that's alright with you. What Spottedwing meant when she said thicker tails wasn't the tail lineart, it was the size of the tail. As for the cartoonishness, I think their heads are the main problem. Their ears are at an awkward angle, and a bit big, and I think their heads just seem a bit wonky. But other than that, they seem like our other blanks. If you think about it Dawn, they're all cartoons... at least in the fact that they're drawn. -- Bramble My Realm 03:11, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Here are my horribble ears.--Yai-Girl 11:25, 12 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

The angle on the tails of the short hairs are bothering me. Make them more curved. I had the same problem. Also, I can barley tell the females from the males. Make the males coalars more maleish ( If that makes since ).Minnowclaw 11:48, 12 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The right ear (Our right), looks smaller than the left ear, on the long-haired cats. Maybe make the right ears a bit bigger. Also, I agree with Minnowclaw; the males are hard to distinguish from the females. I think if you made the females' eyes a bit more "feminine", they'd look better. ;) -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 16:50, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

I made the ears bigger and fixed the tails.--Yai-Girl 09:40, 13 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

You're skipping over the make the females more feminine and the males more masculine. I think thickening their eye lineart, and making the female eyes look more feminine, and making a collar differenece would be better. -- Bramble My Realm 14:31, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

I made the females eyes more feminine, made the males lissence rounder rather than a heart shape like on the females, and I made the long hairs tails thiner.--Yai-Girl 15:36, 13 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl



I made another Rusty... these blanks do work. They just need to be made bigger. Also I like how the tail comes from behind the body on the longhairs more than the other two. Make the shorthairs tails curve round exactly like longhairs. -- Bramble My Realm 19:59, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

I don't think they look right... they're very square on the shoulders and legs and the fur is all... tufty which makes them look like ungroomed kits. I think the fur for both the long and shorthaired needs to be sleeker as if it is well-groomed and the angle of the head is strange. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:22, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

It's not exactly looking at you; the head was made at a 3/4 angle. -- Blackclaw09 20:36, 14 August 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree with you, Sandy. I expressed that awhile ago, with the fur... But, yeah. Do as the loyal deputy said. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 18:29, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

I twicked the long-hairs I will do the short-hairs later.--Yai-Girl 23:09, 15 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Where the leg is connected to the body there is an awkward looking pixel.-- Darkhallows Lair 17:25, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Here?--Yai-Girl 12:59, 19 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

They're so cute! Except, I think the long-hairs' tails need to be fluffier.  Jane Volturi Sparrowsong 17:08, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree. Also, make the long-haired cats' back legs, a little fluffier. Very cute, Yai-Girl! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:25, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - On the longhaired's, their paws are bigger than the shorthaired's - make them the size of the shorthaired's. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire  01:20, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Also, the ears need to be at least slightly more rounded. -- Dawnfeather talk! 09:58, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Also -
 * As I said before, the ears.
 * The mark showing the top of the head extends too far on that side in my opinioin. Maybe just shorten it a few pixels.
 * I know this bit was hard, but the she-cat's love-heart tag collar thingy's shape needs to be refined a bit.
 * The one next to the question mark - I don't know maybe just tweak that little area with the hindleg a bit - it didn't look quite right to me but it will be fine if you don't edit it.
 * The thing that bugs me most about these images - how at that point there with the arrows and diagrams coming from it the line doesn't change from vertical-pixel-coloumn-thingy to the other gradually, but *wup!* it's here, and then *wup!* it's there. Just add in a few other pixels to make it less, sudden. I'm sorry if I seem harsh - I just want to help you get this image approved so tweak week can come.! -- Dawnfeather talk! 10:15, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Here are he short hairs, I will try to edit the long hairs but it's pretty hard.--Yai-Girl 12:39, 24 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Here are the worst long hairs on the planet.--Yai-Girl 15:46, 24 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I'm not sure what happened, but I made this back into an editable topic. The only thing still bugging me a bit would be the female tags on the collars. Other than that, these are really nice, I think. (:-- Quiet !... 18:07, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I think the long hairs look pretty good. The female tags on the collars look different between the long hairs and the short hairs, the one on the short hair looks more like a heart, while the one on the long hair looks more square-ish at the top. (it is supposed to be a heart, right?) Otherwise, everything looks great! Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 20:54, 24 August 2009 (UTC)



(M) - Here's a diagram for the collars. :) Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire  23:16, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Here are the collars.--Yai-Girl 12:35, 25 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Birchfall for approval
My first image. Comments? Criticism? Feel Free Bracken- 17:32, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

This is good Bracken! The only problem I see is the smudged lineart. Fix that, then we can see if there are any other issues.-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 18:25, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

I see a few problems. His pelt is a strange orange colour where it should be brown (like his father). The lineart is very blurry so Echo's right, that does need fixing. Also, the large triangular tabby markings you've used are deemed as cartooony and are not acceptable for the high standards of the project. There are a few alternative marking methods that are esay to do. You can use wavy markings such as on Tornear or Stumpytail - I use these personally for warriors and there are very easy to do. You can also try the 'jagged y' markings such as on Brambleclaw or Cinderheart and there are others besides such as Sunstar. I would suggest either of the first two options however as it is your first image - make sure they're only slightly darker than your base colour. When you've sorted the lineart and the colour and the markings then we'll talk shading. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:21, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Here's Birchfall again, I hope he's better this time. Bracken- 20:12, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

He looks a lot better but next time can you post Birchfall at the same place as your first one. Stonestar 20:22, 1 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

He's much better. You just need to make the pink of the ear more triangular and less blurry, so that it doesn't interfere with the lineart. You could also look at some of the approved warrior images to get an idea of the small issues like the ear pink, shading, and how to make the pupil of the eye.-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 01:05, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the need is very... stand-out-ish. make it end at the tip of the whiskers and erase all that darker color that was paint over his neck. Some of his eye has went over the outer lineart. The shading needs to be blended a lot more, and needs to be darker. I can barely see it in some places. The tabby markings are almost a sickly green color. Make it only a shade or two darker than the pelt.--Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 19:11, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

We're getting there. You have all the components it just looks a bit messy. You need to carefully blend the shading into the pelt so it is a smoother colour transition. Take a bit away from the top of the muzzle as it runs straight from the head and looks odd. Then straighten some of the markings so they look a bit neater and add some more in the gaps you've missed. Make the ear pink triangular and blend it in slightly. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:26, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink, like sandy said, but I think that the shape is fine. Make the pink a little bit darker, though... It's sort of bright. You need to blend the shading and markings tremendously. Try using the blur tool at http://www.pixlr.com/. It'll help you out. ;) Other than that, great image. :) -- MU MB LE 785  21:50, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

Okay, This should be okay, I changed the stripes, and blurred "everything" I hope this is good! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 23:19, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Thin the shading a little bit (It goes a little too far into the body), lighten it a little bit, and blend it some more. ;) -- MU MB LE 785  18:26, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 23:36, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Very good bracken-i love him!!!i just suggest to blend in a littl the shading.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;DeepPink; background:Aquamarine; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;"> ♫ Shimmer ღ 23:51, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded Is he a bit too pink? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 02:57, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

i've got 2 I'm not sure which one is better... Can you tell me maybe? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 22:01, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I personally like the first one. However, use the same eye technique you used on the second one on the first one. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 01:25, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

I got two more!!! new stripes. is blurred better? or non blurred stripes? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 23:08, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

I like the color and the shading, but I think the shading needs to be blurred more... I think the stripes should be a tad bit thicker, and when blurring them be careful not to smudge the lineart because it looks like it got a bit blurred. Also, maybe vary the shape of the stripes a bit (make some longer, or some thicker, or make some 'Y' shaped) because not all the stripes on a tabby look the same. Otherwise, it looks great. --<font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 23:38, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

okay,3 --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 00:02, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Right. I'm not sure which version you want to work on but personally I like the third best. Add tabby stripes on the rest of the body (and legs/tail/head etc). Make sure you have shading in all the required places: top of head, back ear, back, chest, tail, legs, curve of hindleg and blend it all a little without blending the lineart. You just need to neaten this image up a bit as everything's a little messy. Make the ear pink triangular and in the center of the ear and then blend a little. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:18, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 22:03, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Make the stripes on the upper back longer, and add more shading.-- Darkhallows Lair 17:43, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look like you made a line then used the smudge tool. Make them firmer and add them on the head. Add stripes on his chest. Blur the shading and add more on the top of the head. Also thin the shading on the chest.Minnowclaw 20:07, 17 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Re-uploaded--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 17:53, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes look great (how did you do them? I'd be interested in giving them a go) Lighten the shading a little and blend it in more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:15, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

There are some white pixels on his chest, and smudges all around outside/on the lineart. The tabby stripes are a little weird for me, but that's just me, I'm weird. xD -- Quiet !... 06:17, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded  --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 16:41, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks pretty good, Bracken-. I hate to be picky about some of the little things, but it sort of looked like some of the tabby stripes were different textures in one place than another. Try to make it look all the same, maybe smudge them together or make the lines diagonal rather than straight horizontal and vertical. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near his chest, can you fill those in? And just one other thing, some of the tabby stripes are in the outline black pixels, and others don't even look like they're touching the outline. Try to blend them together some more. Otherwise, it looks great. Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 20:41, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat, its looks like some tabby stripes are........jaggier, or sharper then other sites, I suggest to smudge all the stripes a bit. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Aqua; background:magenta; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;"> ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ Peacesong's Talk 20:46, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Very nice, but it looks like you've accidentally blurred some of the tail lineart. If you can't see it, I'll make a diagram for you. <span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:IceBlue;"> Jane Volturi Sparrowsong 19:11, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Archeye (W) for approval

 * So, it's Archeye. Not much to say about this, only thing is that the shading doesn't seem to show much with the black stripes. I can make it more dramatic if necessary. Comments? <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 22:30, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Blend more, shade a tad bit darker, and make the tabby stripes thinner. They look blotchy right now. Other than that, he looks good. ;) (Don't forget to sign with four ~'s!!!) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:27, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'll change those things soon (And I just forgot to sign, I don't know why... XD) <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 22:30, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I increased shading, thinned out the stripes, and blurred thoroughly. Does it look better now?

The tabby stripe on his neck is very light ad needs to be the same color as the other stripes.Minnowclaw 11:33, 12 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

That's not a tabby stripe. That's the shadow from his jaw. --<font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 21:05, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Move the jaw shadow to other other side, under his chin. Also, thin and blur the tabby markings on his front leg. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 22:01, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and changed what you said, Mousewhisker. Is it better now? --<font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 18:16, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - It's actually Mosswhisker. ;) And yes, I think he looks great now. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 21:36, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry! I knew it was Mosswhisker, I just was spacing out, and there's Mousewhisker in the books... yeah X3 Sorry! --<font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 23:11, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - No problem! I figured that that was just a mistake, seeing as Mousewisker is a charater in the books. :) Oh, I really like the jaw shadow on him now, seeing as it no longer looks like a tabby stripe. (Forgot to comment on that earlier, XP) Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 00:54, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Blend his jaw shadow and his ear pink. Then I think he's good to go. -- Bramble My Realm 17:50, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink seems a bit bright and un-natural too.

This hasn't been worked on in a week - if it isn't worked on soon i'll have to decline it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 10:17, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changing what Bramble said. (The reason I couldn't work on it was because I was away from my computer for several days- I apologize for forgetting to tell you.) --<font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 18:38, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? He looks great. -- Bramble My Realm 00:59, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

This is great! All I see is some lineart smudging.-- Quiet !... 06:21, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks very nice, but Archeye's lineart on his back is smudged. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Aqua; background:magenta; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;"> ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ Peacesong's Talk 20:48, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree that it looks pretty good, but I see two things. First of all, between his chest and belly, and the end of his tabby stripes, there's something that looks like a white-light-gray-ish spot that looks lighter than the rest of his fur. Secondly, I can understand why you didn't do this, because the tabby stripes take up so much room being thick, but aren't there any tabby stripes on his belly/chest as well as his back? Otherwise, it looks great! Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 21:03, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Ice, the lighter spot is a highlight, so its fine. xD And not all cats have tabby stripes on their bellies. A lot of tabbies I've see in real life don't have belly stripes, including my uncle's. -- Quiet !... 01:31, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. xD I think it looks great! Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 21:33, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the lineart smudge and tried to blur the highlight a bit more. Does it look good now? --<font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 16:50, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The ear pink is too bright for a gray cat - try darkening it a shade. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:09, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Darkened the ear pink a bit. Better? --<font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 21:59, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Problem
Sorry if I wasn't supposed to put this here, but when I try to get my image on MSpaint, it won't let me. What should I click on to get it on my MSpaint? <font color="yellow" style="background:MistyRose">When You're Gone  Clover!  22:16, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you mean by 'it won't let me get my image on Paint.' Do you mean it won'tCompare the two. :) let you copy it into there? Try pushing the button that says 'PrintScreen' while you're viewing your image and then copy it into there. And also, I wouldn't use MS Paint to make charart if I were you - it's just not a very good program. I recommend pixlr.com - it's free, easy, and requires no download. You can also use another program like Photoshop or GIMP, but most of those require downloading and/or purchase. --Sparrowsong 22:24, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

I wouldn't recommend Paint. Use pixlr.com. As Sparrowsong said, it's free and easy to use. -- Bramble My Realm 02:25, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Cloudtail - Redone
I basically redid the whole picture. :) The old one was bleh. I used more of a superior shading style, and shrunk the ear pink. Also got rid of any pixelated spaces. Suggestions for anything else? -- Bramble My Realm 02:25, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks pretty good, maybe you could make the shading on his back a little bit more, make it cut off more naturally, otherwise, its pretty good. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Aqua; background:magenta; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;"> ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ Peacesong's Talk 02:43, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I think the shading extends too far and he looks too gray as a result. Lighten up the inside edges of the shading and darken the outside a little bit (to make the white seem whiter).

Will do after school. :) -- Bramble My Realm 12:17, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Darkened outer shading, brightened inside shading a bit, blurred thoroughly. -- Bramble My Realm 21:14, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

He looks perfect Bramble very nice. --Stonestar 21:21, 27 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Brownpaw- Redone


I didn't really plan on doing the whole image again, but the old one was such a mess that I gave up and redid it. I've gotten better since then any way... I hope he looks alright.-- Darkhallows Lair 06:07, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

He's beautiful, or should I say, handsome. I love the subtle shading, and the markings are terrific. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 06:13, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Very handsome. The marking across his eye make him look sort of feminine, though. Take that out, and it should be good. -- Bramble My Realm 12:17, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

He looks very nice, the markings are really good and the shading is perfect. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Aqua; background:magenta; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;"> ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ Peacesong's Talk 17:48, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Wow, he looks great. Can you make the ear pink more central and triangular though? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:48, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! I got rid of the eye mark (which did make him look like a girl) and I think the ear pink is better. Heh, as fun as tweak week is I can't wait to put up my Twist image... well I have a couple more images to do before then, I really can't stand my Whitetail or Nettleclaw.-- Darkhallows Lair 22:03, 27 August 2009 (UTC) blur the ear pink, other than that he looks great.--Yai-Girl 16:14, 28 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Mousefur
(NAAAAAHHRRR! The pic won't show, so i deleted it. Some help please)

The thing isn't letting me upload it right now, and it wouldn't an hour ago either. I was just wondering, how many tweak week images can be up on the page at once? Sorreltail and Tawnypelt also have to be uploaded sometime, and I will probably edit Foxpaw and Owlpaw too. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 07:27, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I completely re-did her beause editing her wasn't working well. At all. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 10:58, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I think two at once should be adequate, as some users don't have images they want to redo. She looks beautiful. I don't have any suggestions for more. -- Bramble My Realm 12:11, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

All I can see is that a little more blending would help as it's little smudgy. Looks great though! Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:30, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

She looks really good, no suggestions, like Bramble said. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Aqua; background:magenta; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;"> ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ Peacesong's Talk 17:49, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Berrynose - Redone


I've redone pretty much everything (the new image is on the right). Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 09:41, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

There's nothing except small details. :) The lineart's a little smeared on his back, and under his chin there's a small cloud. Also a tiny gray pixel on his forehead near his muzzle. His color and shading is great though. -- Bramble My Realm 12:13, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded That was my lazyily left over shading from the other version... *ashamed* lol I added transparency too. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:28, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Lol it looks better now. 24 hrs start now. -- Bramble My Realm 21:06, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Voletooth - Redone


He needed tabby stripes so here he is :) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 09:41, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I got nothing. :) Any other suggestions? -- Bramble My Realm 12:16, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blend the tabby stripes a little more and sorry for my inactivity i went camping for 3 days. --Stonestar 13:07, 27 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Reuploaded Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:25, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Suggestions before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 21:05, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Tawnypelt
I replaced the line art as it was blurry, pink-end the ear, re-did the eye, and added shading. That is all. Nothing else. Nup. Nothing. The end. Full stop. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 11:05, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Wow. It did make a difference on the small things.. it looks great, Dawn. I've double checked and I still can't find anything wrong with it.. :) To be nitpicky, you could make the ear pink a bit darker and more visible. -- Bramble My Realm 12:15, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Wow, you've done a great job with her Dawn! I agree with Bramble [who I haven't spoken to in ages :( ] Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:16, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I miss you, too, Sand. :( Stupid school... -- Bramble My Realm 21:04, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

She looks great Dawn! Wonderful job!-- Darkhallows Lair 22:12, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Suggestions before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 11:45, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Boulder - Redone


New version on left.

(M) - I feel sorry for Boulder because he was my first image I ever did for PCA. xP

I redid his tabby markings as classic (The old style was fine, but the markings were messy and didn't mach my current style.) I also put the shading in the right places and made it visable, and got rid of the smuded lineart. I aslo changed the ear pink (You wouldn't see it all in this pose.) Comments?

Maybe lighten the sahding. It looks really dark right now. <span style="color: Black; font-family:Comic Sans MS; background:Blue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black;">Mossflight 18:46, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Mossflight, lighten up the shading, its a little too dark now! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Aqua; background:magenta; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;"> ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ Peacesong's Talk 19:40, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Mosskit - Redone


My first real charart Mosskit She-Cat Version im pretty happy how it turned out comment?--Stonestar 18:35, 27 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

She needs a lot more shading; I can hardly see any at all.--<span style="color:Orchid;background:Wheat;font-family:AvantGarde Md BT;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orchid;"> Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 19:34, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree, everything else is pretty good, you just need to add more shading. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Aqua; background:magenta; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;"> ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ Peacesong's Talk 19:41, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Where should i put the shading?--Stonestar 19:53, 27 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Put a little on her back, then blur it with the blur tool. Just to blend it in. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Aqua; background:magenta; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;"> ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ Peacesong's Talk 20:26, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

This is pretty good Stonestar, but you need more shading, I can't really see it --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> Bracken- Hey there! Whassup!!! 22:32, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I added some chin shading and thickened and blurred the back anything else? --Stonestar 13:36, 28 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Nettleclaw- Redone
His stripes have been bothering me, a lot. So I had to fix that xD.-- Darkhallows Lair 23:35, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

It looks great, except something is bothering me about the stripes... maybe you could vary their thickness a bit? I really like the style of tabby markings though! --<font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ 21:56, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Join
can i join the charart project?i also noticed there is a mentor/apprentice program.can i join?<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:Gray; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Hiddensun 19:08, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

'Course you can, lemme add you. The mentor/apprentice program is pretty new, and I'm still not entirely clear on it though.-- Darkhallows Lair 19:53, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

I think you need to wait for Bramble to add you to the programme. We'll leave this up and she'll see it in due course :) Welcome to the project! Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:00, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Feathertail-Redone


I fixed her eyes, and a little the ear.<span style="color:Orange;background:Blue;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Shim-Shim ★ 19:29, 28 August 2009 (UTC)