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Smokekit (Ki) - CBA
I actually like this wow 19:23, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, if there is any. Looks lovely. c: 19:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. Its probably my monitor or its probably really hard to see. 13:58, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. I love the blue eyes.

Re-uploaded 14:16, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 09:40, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded That's as far as I'll define it - anymore, and it wouldn't look right. 23:47, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of light to the chest and define the light on the face? 02:43, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:12, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

define the leg shading. 17:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paw furthest away from us. With this source, there should be light there. 07:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:37, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the pelt color a bit? Her description says she's /gray/, not dark gray. 21:16, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

My base is #535353, so I think it's fine. 21:26, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Shoon. If she's called gray with no specific shade, then the shade is artist's choice. 23:24, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Me no like. ;-; (Did the image align? or did I misname? I can't tell)

Smooth out the shading on the back, define the hind leg shading, define the eye depth, and blur the earpink just a tad. Looks nice, other than that. 18:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. 18:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Don't know if changes are showing.

Blur/smudge the shading more, and smooth it out. It's looking a bit blotchy right now. 23:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have no idea why this didn't happen when I did Spiketail. Probably because I'm used to setting it to at least 20/25

Define the shading on the legs. Those eyes look sexy X3 09:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit? 12:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened shading and tried to define a bit but I don't know if I can see it. By the way, when you said define shading on legs, did you mean all? And thanks about the eyes, Foxy :P  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:38, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah define the shading on all four legs :p 13:39, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on all four legs. 02:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, but it sort of confuses me to define the shading and the light. I'm not sure if changes are showing but I wanted to get this done so I didn't get this declined for lack of work. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:18, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Defining the light and shading means that basically you need to erase either some shading or put some more shading in, and in this case, it appears you need to erase some shading. So define the light on the legs? :P 13:46, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded When I defined the light on the back two legs, it looked weird so I ended up vaguely getting the front right paw and not doing the back left paw. Then again, I'm not sure if the changes are showing, but I wanted to show that I'm still active (The three days felt longer...) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:20, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the depth on the main body 08:47, April 22, 2015 ( UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading. 20:17, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrow Fur (Ro) ~ CBA
She took me well, around three and a half hours. *shrug*  what kind of tortoise shell is this 15:37, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't quite match - would you like the .xcf for the kit? i also had one ready for the rogue so feel free to look at it to see how her pattern would go on that blank o3o 18:32, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Beebs. Can someone link the kit pic to see the correct pattern? The kit seems more paler. User: Dewdrops56/Talk 15:02, April, 13, 2015

Beebs it'll be lovely to have it - I just don't know how exactly does she look like from the side. Should I make the splotches smaller? 23:41, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

It needs more shading on the belly. Like curl the shading from the edges of the legs upward. 23:43, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

'''Umm is this better? Slightly??''' 10:10, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

idk the kit seems to look lighter 11:00, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups, if it made any differences at all >.> 11:54, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Much better bramble! Get rid of the shadow on the tip of her tail and move it instead on the back/bottom of her tail tip 13:44, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the white, pale, creamy fur on her body seem more... white, pale, and creamy?and blur the shading more at the feet. 19:07, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

I personally think the tail shading is...fine, since that I pretty much copied it from some other images. If somebody agrees with you Storm I'll do that. I'll smudge the shading more later when I get home:) 23:52, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere, and lighten it a few ticks. 04:41, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  10:12, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the shading more? Especially on the chest tail tip and face 14:53, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

The white's looking really grey - did you get the .xcf yet? If so, use the colors from that 18:43, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I got it - but I have to see it after I get home. And sorry to say, if nobody thinks this design is bad, I kinda want to keep my design than copy yours. I don't anyone has actually seen her side. But if somebody says this design is not right, then I'll change it. 02:01, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

I don't mean to sound rude, but if Beebs has a style, when you took on this image, it should be your first priority to try and match that image. While her image shows the front, technically, part of her side is still visible. The kit has patch-like areas, while these are more flecked- you even said it yourself, "my design". Your design should be matching the image we already have..in which part of her side is shown.

Define the shading on the head, and remove the shading on the tail-tip, it shouldn't be there if the bottom of the tail is shaded too… Hope I made sense, I hate explaining things 22:30, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Yep it actually makes sense, Imma try to change her patterns now 13:35, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Is this better? :)''' 14:05, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

smudge the patches on the tail a bit 11:41, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  13:41, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the shading on the tail-tip. 14:04, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

'''I swear I copied the shading from Jagged Peak. ''' 14:41, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, here's a tip to get it to be more of my style, since it still doesn't look quite right - I smudge all of my stripes, texture, patches, and white markings with a size one brush. Try doing that to recreate the look. 17:01, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups, I am dying, but I will not withdraw it! Susume! >:3 13:40, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

blur the stomach shading more 02:58, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten use the shading a ton 05:47, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, I will change it soon, but next time when you comment, please say everything all at once, as I'm pretty sure I didn't touch the stomach shading at all before. Sorry if I sound rude, but I'm getting nervous as I don't have much time left. 11:43, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups god let it be  10:01, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I love this, CBA? 10:40, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Should the title be changed? 11:08, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Okay just blur the chest shading and then you'll be good to go. 11:20, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

hmm  12:02, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 12:09, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W) ~ For Approval
Okay.-- 00:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

So yeah, I see no shading whatsoever. Define shading everywhere please 00:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

The lineart looks faded too, actually.

As well as the earpink, define and brighten the earpink 00:54, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''My bad, i had the shading layer hidden still. Not too sure about the lineart- but im hoping i fixed it? It looked solid black on my monitor. 01:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

There's still barely any shading. Darken it alot 01:08, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:22, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Looks much better. Define the shading on the legs? And possibly the tail? Only when you're feeling less tired maybe XD 01:26, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:35, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

He's in WindClan so shouldn't he be short haired? 02:46, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you thicken the tail lineart a bit? I like him. 02:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't the term 'patchy fur' mean 'missing patches of fur'? lmao 13:18, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing - i have a ton of exams to study for. Anyone without a project can take this. 20:02, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. 20:27, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Let me just say this cat has one of the worst names in the series, along with Shredtail and Maggottail. 20:47, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lovely. Define the light on the legs? 21:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! 21:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. 11:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

He looks a tad red- could you shift the base color ever so slightly?

Reuploaded. 23:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink more triangle-like. Lighten the shading a bit, and the pelt color just a tad, like two notches; on my color spectrum, he's a murky reddish-brown. Also define the light on all four legs? 00:49, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:39, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Looking a bit better, in my opinion. Acestar of ThunderClan (talk) 04:28, April 26, 2015 (UTC)Ace

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Evalution
Yay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? R a v e n s t e p⋆ 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Better? 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we wait before this is settled? 免得我们还要重做 02:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

No- there's no need, considering it wouldn't be done for a long time.

As far as I'm concerned, the chest is smudged with a hard-edged brush 08:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 01:31, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

he needs texture, and on top of that texture theres dull highlights, and it was all smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 04:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

The chest too, it still looks over-blurred 08:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using the smudge tool in GIMP? I know you said you used GIMP. Use the smudge tool on the white chest. The earpink looks a lot better! Maybe lighten it a bit more? 13:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Oh my, the texture didn't fail… Im insanely proud of this  00:42, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink a bit, and make it less neon-y? 00:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's not neon at all. It blends well perfectly with the fur. 01:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make it more pink than purple please. That's pretty much what Storm was asking, simplified. Just make it a lighter pink on the spectrum. Very nice^^ 13:51, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  17:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I just looked at the apprentice, and I think the patch on his chest is a tiiiiny bit smaller Correct me if I am wrong It could just be my screen though 07:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

But that is the apprentice, which is a smaller blank. 13:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the chest white is fine, so im not changing it yet  19:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's supposed to be small, so please shrink it. While the apprentice blanks are smaller, the patch of white you have on here is much too big.

Re~Upped Ok  22:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I actually saved the image and zoomed it in to see details, and I think I can see a black outline around the white chest and the bottom whisker. There's also a black hard-eged splotch on his back. I like him! Just try to see what I was talking about (might be just my screen) and blur the hind paws shading slightly^^ good job 14:13, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

That's actually normal "waste", per se. Define the light on the front paw closest? 18:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

How is it "waste"? It's on the pelt. 00:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, were you talking about on the warrior or apprentice image, Silver? 00:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I was talking about this warrior image. It could  be just my screen though 00:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Uh yeah... Here world  02:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's a lil bit of waste on the top of the nose; also, make the earpink more triangular. 15:35, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I like this. :)  01:16, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Clover (AFD) (Ki) ~ For Approval
-in mysterious voice- Mustachio comfirmed 02:19, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink and define the shading on the legs. Ginger Mustache confirmed 07:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 18:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yay different colored eyes!!!!!!!!!!!! Btw, Did my eyes break or the shading is supposed to look purple? >.> Like, reddish purple. She's soooo cute! Idk what's going on with the shading, it looks a bit weird but I can't find any problems with it. you know what, ignore me. 14:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Bramble, im pretty sure its a tint and it looks fine as it is. Define the facial shading, please. 14:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

ha, dapper moustache cat. can you define the tail shading as well? 17:18, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on both visible front legs.

Still working, Tiger? 08:20, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for lack of re-uploads 16:13, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Millie (E) ~ CBA
Meh. 08:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten up the base? She looks too gray to be silver. 13:34, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

She needs a torn ear.I Iike this :) 14:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Here is an unshaded version of the kittypet for your viewing pleasure.

i dont believe that curled stripe on her leg would be there, its a stomach area stripe not a leg one. 18:35, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Aka much happier 8D 06:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the top of her torn ear  04:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Waste has been slain, thickened a few stripes. 05:18, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Which image did you go off for refs for the stripes? The image also still looks a tiny bit too dark in places...

The kittypet? I'm sure the base color is correct, considering that I color picked from the unshaded Kittypet.... 00:26, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you explain a bit, please? 02:49, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I lightened the shading 08:03, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, the shading is kinda difficult to see through. Did you put the shading layer on multiply? 20:49 Fri Apr 24

Re-upped 08:12, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 04:46, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Curlfeather (W) - For Approval
Yippie! My first PCA charart! If i shoud make her shorthaired, let me know! 15:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Remove some of the shadow from her hind leg where it curls when she sits, as well as the knob of shadow at the back of her tail; it should be a straight shadow line. Also mind blurring the shadow a bit more? And define the light on the front and hind paw closest to us. 15:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading to the head as well. 16:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch and add a bit more light to the foreleg closest to us. If you want, there's a shading tutorial here 18:11, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more… triangular? And blur it more It might be just me, it looks a little too neon-y 22:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, sorry i haven't had a chance to reupload it yet, i'll do it first thing tomorrow. 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The light could be defined on all the legs tbh 05:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  14:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, use a hard edged blur tool at the rate of 100 14:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reupped- Yay! 14:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)'''

The shading seems to be... disconnected on the back, and it should be connected, so add some shading there. I hope that wasn't too confusing. Also, can you define the light on the legs? 15:13, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped I didn't change the light on the legs because that is how it looked on the shading placement. 15:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking all up his back and in other places too. Define the earpink as well. Sorry if I'm commenting too much. I really like this! 17:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more, please? It's difficult to see. 17:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back. If you're gonna add shading to the back and chest fur and tail, add some to the legs please. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 18:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped- Just re-did all of the shading. @Icebreeze, Don't worry, you can comment all you want :)  19:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, because now the shading is looking... green? I suggest that you shade in black and lower the opacity (you don't have to though) but at least make the shading less greenish. Blur the shading as well. I'm sorry I'm commenting again, you're probably getting really annoyed 20:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped Ugh it isint showing up… You are not annoying me don't worry   22:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lolp at first I thought her name was "Cerealfeather" for some reason :P I see that you're having some problems with the shading, maybe try to make the shading itself smoother, then blue it, if that makes any sense 09:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in and I see some waste around the image. Please remove it. User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:02, April, 20, 2015

Blur and maybe dull the shading a bit more. Also, there's a speck of waste at the very top of the image over the tail 18:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also there's still some shading on her hind leg where it curls when she sits that isn't connected to anything, so if you could get rid of that...? 22:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and then blur the shading more on them 07:52, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, will post soon... 15:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  18:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still need to get rid of the random shadow. It's like right by her underbelly, where the hind leg curls into it towards the knee (?) 18:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I've promoted you to an apprentice, and changed the file name. Caps are very important for these filenames- it should be File:Curlfeather.warrior.png.

Did you set your shading layer to multiply? It might help the shadows look a little more tinted to the base color and natural. If you just shade with black and lower the opacity, it might throw the color off a tad. It's just a suggestion, you don't have to go with it if you don't want 18:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the texture flower with the fur more? Can you lighten the shading? (If Ivy said this, Im sorry I couldn't understand what you said.. sorry  lel 19:42, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  01:41, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it still looks really hard edged 14:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  23:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
What a traitor. 21:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I never read MV yet, so I can't agree with you xD Define the light on his tail-tip? 01:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the shading on the legs and define the ear pink just a little. Yes, Appledusk is a big mouse-brain and I was like too bad when he died 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 12:21, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There should be light on his chest, and I think the shading could be defined and blurred/smudged more. 17:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 18:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking on his tail-tip? 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly I didn't read MV yet but when I saw he was killed my Mapleshade I went like "Beautiful job girl" blur the shading below the chin and the shading is leaking on the shoulder 15:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The shading was leaking in several other spots, too. 20:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I really hate this and I want to do something else, so I'm withdrawing. 23:39, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Even though im not officially in the PCA, can i take over? 23:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

You don't need to ask just reserve it

-ReUpped Ok, my turn. 03:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading way more and change the heading please 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his pelt color. 18:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, please. 23:29, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

here is the base colour for the warrior image. 04:27, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thanks for the colour, Stealthfire :)  01:34, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more until it blends perfectly with the pelt 01:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thankfully i was still online  01:48, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to blur the shading way more than that. Try to use a hard-edged blur tool with the rate of 100 (if you're using GIMP) and blur the edges only. 14:19, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink and define it on the other ear 19:27, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks cut off at the edges (by that I mean there's space between the shading and lineart). Fix that, please. Also, blur the shading a lot more. 21:36 Fri Apr 24

-ReUpped I tried texture too  15:01, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You'll need to remove the texture, sorry. His warrior image doesn't have it, and you need to match that.

Podlight (Warrior) ~ CBA
22:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the shading more 11:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste between the third and fourth chest tufts 14:09, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups I also added some more white parts 14:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think you can define the shading just a little 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:02, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 14:14, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (W) - For Approval
Wheeee 8) 00:52, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty! Define the light on the tail? Also, you're an apprentice now, so shouldn't your heading say "for approval"? 01:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

lmao oopsies. re-upped. 01:42, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink. 03:20, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-upped. '''Noticed some waste between the third and fourth chest tufts, lmao dunno how I missed that. 13:55, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped again. Got rid of the paler chest/belly after some research. 14:15, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smooth out the shading on the neck/back/main part of the cat.

Reupped. 12:39, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink just a tad- then i think this can go for a CBA. 14:19, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped again. Had the texture layer hidden on accident, and Breezey I'll do that right after I get out of work lmao I'm cutting it close by uploading this real quick 14:22, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped 23:27, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Heathertail (Q) ~ For Approval
She has a SCARF! Everything from the kit, as I have the file. 02:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She needs more stripes on her legs. You need to look at all the files, not just the kit file, as that only shows the front view. The warrior file is a much better view-point. Also maybe make the eyes more blue-ish, because they look violet. And the head stripe looks super off. Define the shadow on the hind leg closest to us, and the light on the one farthest from us. Maybe add some shadow to the front leg closest to us, define the shadow on the tail, as I can't see any, and get rid of some of the shadow on her face by the side of her muzzle. If the light source is where I think it is, the shadow on that side of the muzzle wouldn't be there. ^^; Sorry if I sound harsh. 03:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes were color picked off so it's fine. All her images are facing another side so it doesn't have to match perfectly to her other images, especially on the body. Also, be careful of how you word things please, because "super off" borders to being rude.... 03:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I fixed the shading around the left legs and tail but that's it. Be mindful that I have the file for the kit, so I gave a hint I made that image, so I know what I am doing. I studied every single image Heathertail has very closely, and she has thick stripes because the queen image is large. Please show a bit more respect, I have been around for a good while and have done many images. I recommend for a new user to just look at the images and advice people give, basically learning through others and give one or two pieces of advice when you're more confident. There's a lot to learn, and that's partly why I like it here. There's something new to learn everyday. 03:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

You could define the eye depth and tail shading a little. 05:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:36, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I do apologize for my behavior. I was extremely tired last night. I still think you could define some of the light on the legs though 11:57, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Also I think some of the shading on her hind leg farthest from us is leaking a bit. 12:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe dull down the shading a bit? 23:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I lowered the opacity ten ticks. 04:34, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadow on the front leg farthest from us? 18:59, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge and lighten the facial shading 05:13, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

can yu sharpen the stripes a bit? theyre not this blurred on her other images. 19:29, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail? gorgeous 11:14, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload thanks! 23:16, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a few ticks on the face, please.

Reupload 23:58, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? Maybe just a smiiiiiiiiiiiidge more? 00:06, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload lightened it a couple of ticks. 04:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. It looks almost completely in shadow. 14:20, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload the limited wi-fi is ridiculous >< 08:46, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Cricket (Ki) ~ For Approval
ew on the stripes, but I did have a lot of fun making this. Everything should be the same as the rogue. 12:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes look fine imo. Add some shadow to the side of his face? Also define the shadow on his front legs and back paw. 12:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 10:38, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:31, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. 14:21, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Featherpelt (W) ~ For Approval
It's a rosetted tabby. 16:23 Sun Apr 19

Define the shading on the tail, both paws furthest from us, and perhaps on the haunch? Stunning work, Hawk. 16:35, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, isn't there an apprentice's image to match? Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I thought that but when I checked her page there wasn't anything... 16:57 Sun Apr 19

Ohh wait I found it... I'll redo it to match. 16:58 Sun Apr 19

Before I touch it Tiger has nominated her apprentice image so I'll hold off for now. 17:39 Sun Apr 19

This is amazing.Can yo define the shading on the back leg a bit? 19:50, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She's sooooooooo gorgeous! But I think you should match the apprentice version not just because of the existing image - and because she needs to look more like Feathertail!!! :PPPPPP 09:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I dont think so, as the other one is being redone. Besides this character isnt Feathertail, shes her own character, even if shes named after Feathertail. --Russettail13 (talk) 12:11, April 20, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Umm, I was joking. 14:31, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Please be aware that if you don't have any critique to give, then please refrain from commenting. Discussions like this belong on talkpages, not the Approval Page. Define the shading on the front paw furthest from us- though it may just be my monitor, so feel free to disregard me if you think its alright.-- 16:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 07:47, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

If you don't mind me asking for clarification, define "smooth out" please. <span style="">1:32 Wed Apr 22</span

Define means bluR.--Russettail13 (talk) 01:38, April 22, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Actually, no, define means to make more visible. I was asking her to tell me what she meant by "smooth out". <span style="">1:39 Wed Apr 22


 * smooth out = blur and expand slightly, so it doesn't end so abruptly 03:23, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading looks gorgeous. Maybe smooth out the shading on the legs, though :P 15:07, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:36 Wed Apr 22

Please define the tail shading. Hawky, this is gorgeous 08:13, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (App) ~ For Approval
Too much like chocolate? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

re-up its been a while, texture ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten her up a bit? She seems a bit too dark, nearly black. 18:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Her warrior image has a paler underbelly, I think you should add that in. 18:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I used a longhaired blank, so you might want to change that. And you need to add longhaired texture to her tail, flank, her cheeks, and legs. And as Raven said, I put in a paler muzzle, throat, chest, and underbelly. 20:01, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

If her description doesnt call for a paler belly then don't add it 11:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

A lot of things don't call for a paler belly, but everyone still adds them. Example is the above Owlnose. He's just a brown tabby tom, but yet the artist added in a paler muzzle, throat, chest, and paws. Isn't it the first artist's choice, at least until the book comes out and they can be tweaked? 13:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

except tabby cats almost always have paler muzzles and the like. 13:58, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I wasn't worried about her being chocoloate until you mentioned it. Anyway, she's cute!^^ I think you should lighten her color just a bit. And back to the nosepink problem. Does she have a pink nose?? (I hope she does :3)  and I expected her to be "striped"! Sorrelstripe. Yea. The Erins made her un-striped 14:28, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the color needs to be lightened a bit, because it needs to match her warrior image. Maybe color pick from that? Also I got rid of the paler underbelly on my image, so don't worry about it. 14:32, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up wow I forgot the longhiar.. just wait. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:14, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also I think some earpink is leaking onto the ear? 20:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 21:31, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on all four paws and define the eye depth? 22:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up idk 22:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading 12:57, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Morning Whisker (Star) ~ For Approval
all colors from the xcf 04:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lovely. Define head shading a touch? Russettail13 (talk) 12:03, April 21, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Re-uploaded Extremely difficult to define on the dark spots 13:26, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading just a tad. Lovely work. 22:11, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:52, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, please.

Re-uploaded 08:49, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please. 14:22, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:43, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Rippletail (W) ~ For Approval
Tell me if he needs to be shorthaired, and if I need to change the eye color 06:34, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the main body and define the light on the legs. 10:49, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Waste in le triangle hole :3 13:50, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading like Fox said, and lighten it a few ticks too. 19:17, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Also, when I was uploading I accidentally created a file named File:Rippletail (SC).warrior.gif could someone delete it for me? 21:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten and smooth out the shading a little more, please. Also, add some light to the legs and back ear, along with defining the ear pink. I have also eliminated the image you've requested me to.

Re-ups 07:45, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define it a little . It's way too light at the moment. 07:57, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups By define you mean shading right? 08:02, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shadow and light on all four paws/legs? 12:24, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 00:17, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Jaywing (W) ~ CBA
Tried out some texture.

It looks great! Define the light on the back paw farthest from us? 19:34, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a little. Fabulous texture. c: 20:10, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the texture on the head and all the paws. Lovely job!! =) 01:55, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Thank you all! :3

CBA? 11:31, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Approval
A little something before I return to studying for my genetics final. Color picked from kit image. 16:11, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more  18:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

His fur is looking a bit too yellow. Are you using yellow to brighten, instead of white? If that's the case, then replace it with white. Also define the earpink a bit more and brighten it. 18:54, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

reup I also smudged the highlight on the chest more. 19:55, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white on the tail a bit more and define the shading on it. Nicely done, Sunjaw! He matches beautifully and I'll make you an apprentice right away.

reup Thanks, Lightning! The tail tip just would not smudge as much as I wanted it to >.> ... 20:21, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. 01:21, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shadow to his haunches? Looking good! 01:50, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

reup Also adjusted the shading to a darker gray-tinted purple. If it looks off I'll change it back. :3 02:15, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body 04:20, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a smidge? 12:41, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

reup 14:22, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:20, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (W) ~ For Approval
I'm assuming I can post this now 20:07, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes some more, and define the light on the ear closest to us. Looks good 20:35, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you. I blurred the stripes a bit more. I don't think there's supposed to be light on that ear, I used the same light source on him and it was ok, but if someone else agrees I'll add some light. 20:48, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too paint brushy--try and smudge a tip onto them so they're not so uniform. Blur the shading on the back and tail and define the ear pink 21:12, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I wasn't totally sure about what you meant on the stripes, but I tried my best. 23:26, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink underneath the shading. Can you perhaps move it and define it?

Re-upped 12:04, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yarrowpaw (A) - CBA
- I shall call him Mangopaw and he shall be mine, and he will be my Mangopaw! 18:29, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is looking purple. 19:13, April 23, 2015 (UTC)


 * I did that on purpose to keep some of the redness in the fur, I often tint the shading a bit 19:15, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, then define the shading on the back leg behind the body. lol 19:18, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking a bit on his chest? 19:33, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:19, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe add some more shadow and define it to the front leg closest to us? 00:46, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:54, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? So lovely .o.

Hootwhisker (W) ~ For approval
I forgot to log out of my sister's account before I uploaded this, if it says Snowsplash uploaded it it's because of that 08:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit lighter,he looks black 12:06, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Same deal as Featherpelt - isn't there an apprentice image to match? Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:23, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, there is - File:Hootwhisker.apprentice.png. It needs to be renamed to Hootwhisker. Anyway, I made the apprentice, so it's gotta match. Do you want the xcf, Flame? 14:18, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, it looks hard edged. 22:53, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing sorry my art program crashed 23:30, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

im not part of the project, but i will take over. 19:37, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded    22:13, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

First, the earpink is neon, so make it less neon-y. Second, blur the shading a lot. Finally, the shading seems to be cut off where the foreleg closest to us meets the body. This is a nice first image, though. 22:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to match the apprentice, so it needs texture. Do you want the xcf? If you're wondering how I did the texture, I made two layers - one with darker than the pelt, 1px size lines, the other with lighter than the pelt, in the gaps where the darker lines weren't. I took a small brush and smudged the lines on each layer. 23:14, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him darker. Hootwhisker is dark gray. Also add some shadow to the back of the ear farthest from us? And I don't know what it is, but there's a splotch of white on the line of his front leg on the back. 00:14, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I will post it in a few minuetes, just need to get rid of some waste. 01:14, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Perchpaw (MV) (A) ~ For Approval
dong ding 18:43, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded changed the shading a little cuz i wasnt happy with it 20:02, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light and shadow on all four paws/legs? 01:43, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

only the back legs need defining tbh, the front legs are fine 12:55, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded 08:30, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) - For Approval
Matching the other images was surprisingly difficult. 18:45, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

should be the male blank. 18:53, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:57, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the body shading a bit 20:52, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define it too please. I cant see it very well. Probably just my computer :T 22:38, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit too blue... Maybe darken it? 17:30, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

@Storm Have you ever heard of something called shading tint? 03:41, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

你不用这样了O.O Anyway just define the body shading 10:45, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Mosspelt (E) ~ For Approval
This was harder to match than it should have been 23:49, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink just a little more, please. 08:49, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Alrighty

Sexy old cat .O. Smooth out the shading at the part where the haunch meets the tail 10:43, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Birch (Ro) - For Approval
well I did try — <span style="">Sat Apr 25 01:33

He looks amazing. Define the shadow on the underbelly? And the main flank? 01:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more >:V 01:44, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

reups take 2 — <span style="">Sat Apr 25 01:50

define the tail shading and smudge the ear pink a bit 12:54, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Puddlekit (K) ~ For Approval
hiya. 03:19, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot and define the shading.

Maybe brighten the brown a bit too. Wasn't there an image already? I could've sworn it was a lighter brown than that. 11:33, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, there was a mca image that Jayie made. But when the new allegiances were released, the cite the image was made for is no longer valid and the images are void. So, Breeze really isn't obligated to match any images. 11:45, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly how Kate is implying on both lists is that Puddle here is gonna be littleclouds apprentice so it wouldn't really be fair since jayie made her image first. As for the image define the shadow on the legs/paws. 17:28, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Still, if thats the case, then this can always be redone once a new cite surfaces for his mca role. Though if anyone else agrees with you, then i wont have a problem redoing his pattern to match Jayie's. =P 19:24, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You're not required to match it, nor would I expect you to. If...Although that would make one cute kit image. Regardless, I think my comment and Storm's still stands- that brown looks black.

Dang it I wanted this one. Define the shading on the legs and chest/shoulders. Nice color for the eyes. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:19, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Berryheart (W) - For Approval
yey all colors are from the queen.

Smudge the tail-tip and chest white a little bit more? And define the shadow on the legs/paws closest to us? 23:55, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Can you define the facial shading? Sorry, i just can't see it super well. 01:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't really facial shading to define, actually.

Could you define the shading one the back and the legs behind the body? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 12:43, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (K) ~ For Approval
wow I actually like this <span style="">00:09 Sun Apr 26

Cute! Can you smudge the dark brown lines on her? :) 01:04, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 10:44, April 26, 2015 (UTC)