Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Ryewhisker (W) ~ Tweaked
I seriously couldn't do anything with those stripes, so I redid them, but keeping the same basic pattern. Also redid the shading and pretty much everything else so yeah I apologize.

This was supposed to be a shading tweak. If you want to redo the stripes, then you should have nominated the image for that before going ahead and doing it. 02:55, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

One, it's my image, two, I could not redo the shading with how the stripes were. As the OA, I should have that right. The stripes were black, and with the shading, I couldn't do anything that wouldn't make it look green. I tried every possible method of doing so, and nothing worked.

One, even OAs nominate their images - and plenty of OAs have gotten turned down from tweaking or redoing them. I don't see what makes you an exception. And two, if you had nominated it again people probably would have said you could but even then what's the point of the tweak nomination page if you can go ahead and do whatever you want just because it's your image. We decline redone images when they are supposed to be tweaks and it sets a bad example when one of our leads decides they don't need to ask. OA or not. 03:03, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

I know OAs renominate their own images; I've done it myself, and I'm not stupid. I just find it a waste of time since a good 99% of the time, the tweak page is neglected and it already passed for a tweak (I have seen many users do things other than what a tweak was nominated for), there's no point. I also followed the same stripe pattern that I used before. It is impossible to tweak this without looking green. It's a black pattern on a brown coat. Impossible to do with tinted shading, and looks horridly green with black. I'll nominate it, so as long as it doesn't just sit there, like the rest of the tweak page has as of late.

You're still supposed to nominate it before you redo it because that's the purpose of the tweak page. Just because it's been rather inactive doesn't mean that when you do something as major as completely redrawing the stripe pattern or changing the color of the image it doesn't need to be voted on like anything else. We might as well throw the whole page it out the window because some people can't just wait a week for their image to be voted on. 03:21, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly don't know why you guys are throwing so much stuff on each other of an image that was tweaked more than it was supposed to. It seriously doesn't affect you guys in any way and it was one time so I don't see the need for an entire fuss about it. 05:15, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

Okay so since the nomination actually passed and stuff, can I have comments? I'm not too confident about the stripe pattern, though...is it actually natural or anything like that?

To me, it does kinda look unnatural, but mainly the body. The face and tail stripes look alright to me c: Bb  un   legs  18:13, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Well, that's the thing. I don't know if it is, and what looks unnatural to one, may not be to others. I think the haunch part is fine, but...eh it just seems weird, and I kinda want to shift things around a bit.

The only thing I can really see about the stripe pattern is around the head area. You might erase those top few stripes that are continuous with the body since up where they are they are on the cat's cheek, which would be in a shallow U shape from the chin to the ear. The rest of it seems fine to me, though. 21:22, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you maybe define the shading (or the unshaded parts) a bit? I can't really distinguish them apart. 15:16, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Nutmeg (KP) (KP) - Tweaked
OA was Leaf-Storm, and she needed to be more brown in color and have a shading tweak. With the way that I tweaked the color, I may have to work on the eyes some more, because they don't look as defined as they did before .-. I'll get it tomorrow, I'm sleepy 05:51, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

The top of the head seems oddly gray.

Blur the muzzle and define the shading a bit more 23:45, May 7, 2013 (UTC)

This has been reuploaded it just wouldn't let Ivy comment. 00:55, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

Nutmeg (KP) (Q) - Tweaked
I believe that Shelly was the OA of this, and she needed to be brown because she was bordering on ginger. This one was surprisingly harder to tweak. 06:02, May 6, 2013 (UTC)

Could you possibly dull the ear pink, if possible? It seems like bubble gum. If not, that's cool with me.

If possible, could you define the shading? I'm having a hard time seeing. 01:48, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

This has been reuploaded it just wouldn't let Ivy comment. 00:55, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

Dapplenose (W) - Redone
Redone to match the Apprentice; Oa's were Scarlet and Darkhollows. Suggestions for improvement? 07:02 Wed May 8

It doesn't match the apprentice. The apprentice has no darker tail tip, smaller, lighter, less-defined dapples, and it doesn't have the tail undercoat thingy. 11:24, May 8, 2013 (UTC)

Actually the apprentice does have a darker tailtip, but I think it's smaller. And ya, lighten up the mottles a bunch. Looking good : D 00:33, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Firestar (Star) ~ Tweaked
'ope this looks okay. OA be Breezy, tweaked to tint the shading. Comments? Bb un   legs  22:03, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Made the colors match more. Lets hope it looks okay ;A; Bb  un   legs  22:16, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

I thought you were just supposed to tint the shading and nothing else? The colors looked like they matched fine before; it was just the shading that needed to be fixed.

Re-up. agh, my bad Bb  un   legs  22:31, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

I nominated it for the base coat to be made a bit redder and the stripes to be made a bit browner to match the other images. I don't believe the shading ever came into it at all? 03:34, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, then my bad. I thought the /shading/ is what made it off. My apologies.

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  18:27, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the shading still look a bit different than before?

It's not you. I see it too.

Russetfur (Alt. D) - Tweaked
- Killed ze' gray shading. OA be me 02:03, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white, it's a bit flat.

Hollowbelly (W) - Tweaked
- Redid the shading and trying a new tinting method. OA was me. Comments? 02:03, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

It looks like you just laid blue over it, rather than tinting the shading blue. I'd suggest either toning down the tint, or putting it on multiply if it's not.