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Jayclaw/Heronwing mistake in ROF bonus scene
So, I'm writing the bonus scene for River of Fire and Jayclaw turns into Heronwing halfway through. Should I just add that as a mistake in trivia and keep Heronwing as Heronwing in the summary, after Jayclaw mysteriously becomes her? We've never really had this issue before, so I don't know how I should go about it.

I think it would be best to refer to him as Jayclaw, since that was the character it began with, yes? Turning into Heronwing was a mistake. The character it was supposed to be was Jayclaw, so Heronwing would be listed in the mistake section. 01:16, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

If there's concrete evidence that it's a mistake, I believe we can keep it as "Jayclaw" in the chapter summaries, due to it honestly being a mistake. (Not even sure when the mistake happens, as I've only read the bonus scene once....didn't even catch the mistake lmao) We don't suddenly write a character with their full name by their apprentice name, despite them accidentally being called that sometimes.

I definitely agree it should stay with Jayclaw, and then have Heronwing listed as the mistake. It's already on the character articles that way iirc

Twilight/Chapter 12 ~ Silver Nomination
Credits to Fox for writing the first chapter part. I finished it, tweaked the summary, etc. 07:55, 5/21/2018

There are a few typos, can you grab those? And merge "She knows she won't argue with the brown tom in front of the ShadowClan warriors, but is hurt by his reply." with the previous paragraph, since it is apart of the same scene. 02:26, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Twilight/Chapter 15 ~ Silver Nomination
Credits to Icy for the first half. 09:17, 5/21/2018

There are some typos, can you catch those? Also, maybe at the end, add "supposed" to "she's to do." 02:33, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Night Whispers/Chapter 17 ~ Silver Nomination
Fix some of the spacing and there are punctuation errors too. 02:40, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

And remove the errors section if there are no errors. 02:41, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Updated Sorry, didn't see any spacing issues - each template has the one space between it and the paragraphs are like normal, and I couldn't spot any between the words either.

CBV?

The Sight/Chapter 5 ~ Silver Nomination
21:06, 5/21/2018

Would Lionkit thinking that Hawkfrost was the RiverClan deputy be classified as a mistake? 02:49, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Fixed. 05:37, 5/23/2018

CBV?

Long Shadows/Chapter 6 ~ Silver Nomination
Credit to Jayce for writing this before me. 21:06, 5/21/2018

There are some typos, can you catch those? 02:50, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Long Shadows/Chapter 11 ~ Silver Nomination
Fix "She asking her if she can act like a mouse so she can catch her." 02:52, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Updated

CBV?

The Sight/Chapter 4 ~ Silver Nomination
Fox wrote the first bit^^

There are a few typos. 02:54, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Updated

CBV?

Bramblestar's Storm/Chapter 4 ~ Silver Nomination
ty to Brambleshade for characters

There is a capitalizing issue - cats is not capitalized, when it should be as the first word of a sentence. Seemed should be "seem." 02:57, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Updated actually I think it should be 'seemed' because they returned from ShadowClan, and Bramblestar is recounting how they seemed skinny when he saw them. Since that happened in the past, they seemed skinny when he saw them earlier (does that make sense rip)

CBV?

Eclipse/Chapter 7 - Silver Nomination
00:18, May 26, 2018 (UTC)

Mainly the same as chap. 8's comment - could you go and check for redundancy?

Updated. 09:15, May 26, 2018 (UTC)

Eclipse/Chapter 8 - Silver Nomination
05:45, May 26, 2018 (UTC)

For the first nine paragraphs I think you could go through and check for redundacy of Jaypaw, Cinderpaw, and Leafpool. The medicine cats in particular have a handful of instances where their name is used twice per sentence, and then in general the names could be less used, linds like the back half of the chapter^^

Updated. 09:12, May 26, 2018 (UTC)

The Sun Trail/Chapter 16 ~ Silver Nomination
09:05, 5/26/2018

Fading Echoes/Chapter 19 ~ Silver Nomination
09:05, 5/26/2018