Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Minty (Ro) ~ Tweaked
My first tweak :3 OA was Icestorm123 and the shading needed to be blurred. 13:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I had reserved this, but I don't want to take away your glory ;3 I'll be happy to give it to you ;D Blur the shading a bit still. 05:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

facepalm* I'm sorry! Anyways, '''Re-Uploaded. ''' 14:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail tip. 14:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 15:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks like she has a gray tail tip, and not a highlight.. Can you fix that? 15:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. 20:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:23, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes lighter and brighter, and redden the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:27, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to me like it's only on the outside of the image and in. Lighten the back, darken the neck, lighten some of the legs and tail, and shade behind the shoulders. Breeze whisker  15:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. I re-did the tail shading because it was giving me a headache. :P 18:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and lighten all the shading. 01:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, including the eyes, so it matches the queen. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for a better idea of what the shading placement should look like, and blur all the shading. 22:39 Sun Jan 1

Re-Uploaded. I re-did her. 19:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the earpink. 19:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bunch. 01:43 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. 21:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job! But can you fix the tail highlight? It still looks as if she was a gray tipped tail. Also, make her nose darker. 21:14, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:07, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten and bright the eyes a lot? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:38, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) Redone
I got permission for Iceheart to redo him instead of making it a tweak. His pelt colored bothered me; I felt it was too close to white. First redo as a warrior (Not on the list yet, but I've had 4 chararts approved) 12:27, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

AGIN! Its rogue, no rougue! ,13:51,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Leaf, chill, its just a typo, it can be fixed. Lighten the shading a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Chill Leafstorm, and spell correctly if you're going to correct. Shouldn't the black go up farther on his legs to match his leader? Breeze whisker  16:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just reread that. I didn't mean to sound so rude. Sorry Leaf. ^^; Breeze  whisker  16:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. 17:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love Blackstar! The back black paws should be a little more black. 17:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, if they're any darker than you won't be able to see the lineart 17:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant raise to black up or something xD Blur the earpink alittle bit - 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah sorry. I meant to raise it up so it's level with the front. 17:42, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot the back black paws. 20:51, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black and enlarge the earpink. 20:53, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more - 20:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And blur said shafing. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the black in the ears. 22:41 Sun Jan 1

Blur and lighten the shading more - 00:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white into the black on the ears. 03:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the paws and blur them 00:46, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink larger and add eye color. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) - Redone
It was on the list for redoing. The stripes needed to be redone. OA was Sandstar12. Comments for improvements? 19:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

it doesnt look brown,..did you take the color from the old pic? .__. - 19:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^ If anything, now, it's the shading. 20:12, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Maybe try thicken the stripes a bit? ,20:21,December 31,2011 (UTC)

OHHHh Now I see it! 8D Define the tail stripes. - 20:27, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 02:21, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changed the style. I thought it looked a little better. =3 Comments? 00:37, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are kinda gingery. Could you desaturate them and either blur them all or smudge them all so they match? Right now only half of them are definitively smudged :P 00:50 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded 01:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:50 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded - ^^ 03:12, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Add/define the shading on the back ear and tail. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  03:52, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:41, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I changed the stripe style, but if the other one was better, I can revert it... 04:01, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nice, darken the stripes, add some more on the face and darken shadings a tad. and i think there is a blurred lineart on the tail tip. ,18:28,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
She needed to be redone to match others she was on the list. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 03:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the unshaded bits brighter, they sorta look shiny on the other images. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 03:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda greenish. Make her a little more orange. 03:33, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:10, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and define the earpink. 20:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:51, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt. E) ~ Redone
Scars and a black cat. Fun. :D Breeze  whisker  02:44, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, OA was Paleclaw. He needed ragged fur and a short muzzle. Breeze whisker  02:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Why are you so good at chararts? ._. *feels inadequate* blur the shading a bit. 02:46 Tue Jan 3

I agree. I luffles this It kinda looks like someone punched his current one it he face which sent shock waves all through out his body o3o Darken the shading. -- 02:48, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Heheheheh, brighten the unshaded parts just a liiitle bit 02:50, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wow. That was a lot of comments fast. XD I can't darken the shading anymore. It's at 100% opacity for the color I used. I lightened other parts so the shading appears darker. Breeze whisker  02:54, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

and darken the shading on the back - 02:57, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

You could darken the shading by creating a duplicate layer. Just a suggestion :3 03:04, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That looked yucky. I just used a darker color instead. XD Breeze  whisker  03:12, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Why was this listed for a redo? 0.o It's an easy tweak, but it' doesn't really matter. This look better than mine, so I don't have a problem. XD Could you redden the earpink though? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:54, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It said redo so I redid it. XD Now that I think about it that probably would've been a heck of a lot easier. Breeze whisker  05:14, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Whataminute the scars have to match the earpink right? Or am I wrong? 05:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think so Bloo.... Not sure though. :P Could you make the earpink stand out more from the pelt, either way? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:47, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's that scars, skin patches, nose colour (if it's pink) and ear colour should be the same, no? Sky-  Lather. Rinse. Obey. 18:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes and no. Skin color is usually the same, but you've got to factor in things such as fur and the thickness of the skin. A cat's ears almost appear red when the light it behind them due to the blood vessels which show through due to how thin the ears are. Like the red you see in between your fingers when you hold your hand close to a strong light. And the ears also have fur inside them, which covers up much of the ear pink, and unless you want to draw each hair one at a time, makes the earpink appear close to the color of the cat. So, in this case, the skin in the ears could be the same color as the scars, but due to the fur inside them, the ear appears to be much darker. Breeze whisker  19:41, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

K, smartypants. xD It sorta looks dark grey, make it look more black? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 22:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, too long, didn't read! xD Alright, I admit defeat. Anywhoo it's doesnt looks dark grey, but thats my opinion 23:08, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Haha Sorry I've been busy. I'll reupload this as soon as I have time to work on it. Breeze whisker  03:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  22:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Whoops. Reuploaded. (Forgot to turn on shading. Breeze  whisker  23:08, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (KP) - Redone
OA was my lovely apprentice, Thistle. I feel bad redoing her image, but it had to match the others, so.... comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:44, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Theres a tiny line sticking out of her neck. It's at the top left part. *nit-picky* 05:58, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's part of a whisker. Make the earpink more visible. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  21:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

No, it is a tiny line, so erase that. 01:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it is a whisker, just one of the pixels is erased. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  12:04, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

...Actually, it is not part of a whisker, and if you looked at the blank you'd know that. Moonleaf is right. 20:13, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <span style="">07:02, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Reuploaded - I'm not changing the color of the earpink, but I did define it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:37, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) - Redone
I only had MS Paint and Pixlr, but I still managed to make it look good! Original artist was Mistyheart, and the shading was blotchy I believe, but I had permission to redo it. 06:27, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, brighten the earpink, smudge the white in the ear, and erase the waste by the ear. Not bad. <span style="">10:56 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded I also blurred the smudges. 17:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Y u no add eye color? 23:05, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is eye colour. It's just really pale. 00:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Then can you make it a little darker? 00:57, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:45, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

xD Bloo. I don't know if it's just, but the earpink needs to be reddened. 01:47, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, white cats most of the time have pink earpinks. 01:52, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">02:43 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded 20:08, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. 01:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, I think it's fine. 04:57, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Ki) - Redone
Hmm I tried match it best, but its too small o_O OA is Icestorm123 and its redoned by Rainwhisper. ,18:58,January 3,2012 (UTC)

Add brown to <--- this side of his cream belly. Also smudge the eye markings up a tad bit 19:07, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes! It looks better now, reuploaded ,19:20,January 3,2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 23:31, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,14:19,January 4,2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 01:27, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, reuploaded ,18:17,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (E)- Tweaked
She needed the white on the muzzle, like the other images. It was really bugging me. x_x <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 19:47, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

pffft, what's bugging me is the patches. add some shading to them or sumthin' 23:31, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. x_x <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 23:58, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the markings on the haunch (that always bothered me :P) and make the earpink slightly smaller and blur it. <span style="">01:51 Wed Jan 4

Re-uploaded. Bleh. There's always something to annoy someone, isn' there? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 01:58, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 00:50, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

pssst, Stoneclaw. I don't think she can blur the shading without ruining everything else. But if you mean on the patches, then I'll admit I'm a derp 00:56, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I guess it's true...There is a way to blur it without blurring anything else, or redoing the shading or image. You gotta use layers...If you do, put the lineart on a seperate layer on top of the base image, and add a layer that's under the new lineart layer but over the base layer. Add another set of shading and blur it on the new shading layer, doesn't always work, though. 01:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

She looks like she's made of plastic, and it's bothered me for the longest time... honestly, I'd say redo this, personally, unless you can contact the OA to get the layered image to tone those highlights way down. 04:57, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, what's really bothering me is the patches. they look like somebody stuck pieces of bubblegum on her. You can just get an archived image, past the white chest and re-draw the patches. I don't know if you can since your only adding the white muzzle here xD 05:25, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh...I dunno. It doesn't really look like the other images either. I'll put up the redone version, and if more disagree, I'll revert and try and tweak from there. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 05:57, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Looks much better. (sigh) Some people don't understand the concept of soft light... anyway, could you make the patches a bit more fleshy colored? They don't have to match the earpink, since the skin on the ear is thin and the skin everywhere else is not. 06:01, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 06:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Nightcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
She was on the tweaking list for it was inconsistent with the queen image. OA was Bramble and then there were a few other people that messed with it, being Moonflight, Frostheart, and Night Shine. Comments for improvement? 21:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Er...what happened to the earpink? xD <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 21:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

xD fix that and blur it too XD 21:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Fail on the ear-pink. Comments? 21:39, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  21:51, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

It still looks kind of awkward too. 21:56, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps you should redo the earpink...Erase it, fill in that part and redraw it... 21:57, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Fail with the ear-pink. Comments? 22:52, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink like the charart below us. 01:17, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. 01:36, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't mean to sound rude and annoying but, Rainy doesn't use highlights. Sorry *hides* 01:38, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear-pink looks weird still, make it more a triangle and blur it. (Sorry if I sounded mean). <span style="">02:37 Wed Jan 4

Sorry, looked all shiny on my computer so I just thought it was highlights xD  21:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's okay. :P I still feel bad for pointing it out :3 21:17, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define and blur the tail shading. 01:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry it took so long to re-upload, I got mad when my dad decided to make the laptop not work anymore. So i had to go back to the computer, so... ya. 19:20, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Dawncloud (Q) - Redone
Needed to match the warrior/apprentice version, but since the apprentice needed to be redone with the new blanks anyway, and the warrior needed some serious tweaking, I got permission to redo :3 If you guys hate this pattern, though, I'll try to duplicate the one on the warrior. Comments? <span style="">02:46 Wed Jan 4

Personally, I love her warrior image's pattern <3 There's nothing wrong with this one, but could you try and match her warrior? I'd love you forever :D 03:22, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

^Yeah, I sorta agree xD 04:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Bring this---> earpink down some. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  12:00, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I copied the pattern, but I'm not using the exact colours from the warrior version, as that palette is green-tinted. I'll redo the warrior/apprentice to match. <span style="">05:11 Thu Jan 5

I personally don't think the warrior needs to be redone for being tinted green xD. Maybe tweak it or sumthing bye messing with the colors. Lighten the shading just a little and desaturate the earpink and nose 05:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dude. The shading on the warrior image. Is. Terrible. <span style="">05:24 Thu Jan 5

Somebody getting tense? BD I'm too lazy to take a look, so I'll go by what you just said. now darken the earpink 05:29, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded hahaha not tense - angry XD *Wildy rage at bad shading* <span style="">01:29 Fri Jan 6

Birdsong (E) - Redone
OA for this was Mintstarr, Canyonsong never got to post it. The image was overall unrealistic and the stripes looked more like spots. If you're wondering why I've added more ginger to her than her description allocates, it's because I know she's a torbie, and they are a tabby/totoiseshell and the ginger is over their body, and I'm going for realism. Of course, if the project disagrees with this, I can easily remove the extra ginger, but I don't know why you wouldn't want it to be realistic. 20:55, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I disagree. You might be going for realism, but I've said this before and I will say it again: The Erins don't give squat about genetics. If her description says ginger flecks on her head, then put ginger flecks on her head. Don't get me wrong, I adore this image and it really is beautiful, but it doesn't match how she was described in the book. 21:55, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Correction: Canyonsong DID post this but got declined for some reason. And I kinda agree up there, you can't assume she's a torbie. xD Also, I been wanting to say this about Birdsong's description when I read her in the allegiances, I think the fact that she is just flecked with gray, not just her muzzle. But that's just what I think 23:41, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Just because the Erin's don't care about realism doesn't mean we shouldn't. Honestly, why do you think we put stripes on all the gingers? This is gorgeous, and Ivy's logic is sound. Blur the ear pink a tiny bit and make the stripes more noticable, as she's a torbie going on her description (the first we've had, I believe). 23:53, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful. =D Define the ginger patches on the muzzle (if there are any). 00:48, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I am agreeing with Oblivion here. Can you blur the white just a tad bit more? 01:36, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm with Shelly on this one, actually. It looks awesome as it is. Blur the earpink a tad. <span style="">01:53 Thu Jan 5

Ok, so should I remove the body ginger or not? I could go in the middle and put little brindle patterns of ginger throughout her pelt =p  03:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brindle patterns 8D <span style="">04:37 Thu Jan 5

I'm with Shelly. I say leave it as it is. And If we don't care about realism. we'd have to revert all the tweaked gigner cats BACK. Along with Squrrielflight the Firetruck. And do what Wild said. Brindle patterns, and blur the white a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:25, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (Ro) ~ Redone
Yay! My first tweaked charart! Just to tell you, I use highlights and right now they're blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

OA and why did it have to be redone? 23:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the whole thing, I can't see the lineart 23:53, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the redo list and OA is Blackclaw09. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:58, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink. 00:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

His ears are facing <---that way though. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:39, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but they should still be centered. That's the placement. 00:47, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

But, the earpink placement for Shadepelt's elder would have to be centered, then. I think it's fine. 00:49, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If is ear-pink facing ←← this way, i think you should add it on the second ear too. ,18:25,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (K) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images, OA was Sandwich989. Comments? I'm not changing any colors; they're from her apprentice image. 01:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  01:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I thought we were allowed to do dark shading?...Many images have a lot darker shading, but I'll just turn down the contrast a bit.Re-Uploaded. 01:29, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Rawr. I wanted to do her 3: Cute! Blur the earpink on <--- this side. 01:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Toadfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
Well, this had to be redone to look more like his other images. I love kits :3 01:38, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visible. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  01:41, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is this? 02:13, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Looks great, Misty! 02:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Stoney. ^-^ Darkened the shading. :3 20:53, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh always forget OA... The OA= Sandstar12  21:02, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Gorseclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
I understand that it looks horrible. :/ I rushed. Comments? 02:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

No way this looks amazing Stoney *was too adhd to do this o3o* darken the nose it just looks to bright. I think this is named wrong It's not on his page >.< 02:37, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed file name. 02:43, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww! He's so cute! :3 Can you lighten the tail shading just tiny bit? I just can't really see the stripes. ^-^ 02:59, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

And make the nose colour less neon. 04:36, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in the pixel on his head you left empty. ^^ It looks good! 04:52, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Milkfur (WC) (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be done as shorthaired. OA was Moonflight, comments? 08:27, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some haunch shading, and blur alot. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 09:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that light parts alot ,18:20,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it. <span style="">20:07 Thu Jan 5

It looks like there is blurred lineart on the haunch. 20:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You know you didn't actually have to redo it? You can just layer the shorthaired lineart over the original version. See the tutorial if you don't know how. 22:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and there's some missing lineart on the front paw and a few other places. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother (Q) ~ Redone
Redone to look like Leafstar's new awesometastic image. Took the colors from Leafstar's leader image. The patterns are a bit different, but I don't think the books said they looked exactly alike so much as "nearly identical". OA was XxdovesongXX with a tweak by Bramble. Comments? 17:53, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

So lovely, Shelly! Define the earpink on right ear, you filled the other ear with earpink. Define the shading! 17:57, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I interpreted the image to have both ears turned towards the viewer. And you can see the back of the ear nearest you, so I filled it in as you would a leader's ear. And I picked the earpink off of Leafstar's image. Thanks, though. :3 18:01, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Gorsetail (P3) (W) ~ Redone
Okay, it was on the redo list because the patches need to be lighter and shading needs to be redone. OA= Flamingomom3 with a redo/tweak by Moonleaf. Comments? 00:07, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the patches on her front legs and hind foot closest to us darker. It was only a tweak. 00:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smoketalon (W) - Tweaked
Since I realized I can't put up Brackenfur, I decided to do Smoketalon, instead. This is actually tweaked. Comments? 00:53, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

The space in between his legs is filled. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 00:58, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tend to forget that area. 01:00, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give him a pupil? Looks like he doesn't have one.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:18, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, he does have a pupil. The eye deosnt matter. Anywho, define/darken the shading more 23:19, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (W) - Redone
Discussion about this being redone is on the talk page. I didn't know when Ivy was gonna post hers, and I already finished mine, so I went ahead and posted it. Since Ivy reserved before me, I'd be happy to change it to match hers if she wants. OA was Ashshadow, then redone by Ivy. Comments? No drama on here, go to the talk page if you think he should get redone. 4 SW agree on it, so we're going ahead for now, but if you disagree, don't bring it up here. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:02, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Might just be me, but the shading on the legs makes it look like he has darker legs, sorta like Brackenfoot. Lighten it up a tad? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:05, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Gorgeous! I still think he should be a closer color to this guy, but yours could be fine as well. 03:13, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

As pretty as this is (and it's gorgeous) I agree with Shelly :3 <span style="">05:35 Fri Jan 6

I tried color-picking from that image, and a few others of the same shade. It's not really accurate. He has a 'Flame Colored Pelt" and that nowhere near flame colored. I searched bright ginger cats and I found on that look flamey and color picked from that and ended up with this. It's accurate, but I did make a version from the ref you gave me and can upload it if you want but really it's more golden/pale ginger. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:07, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly too, perhaps just saturate the image a tad. <span style="">01:31, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Kinkfur (W) - Redone
Okay, if anyone has any real problems with me redoing this, I can take it down and revert it. But in the old charart, it needed more stripes, shading needed to be fixed, ear-pink needed to be defined, and I wanted her to look a bit spikier. OA was Sandy, I believe. Comments? 04:26, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

If this was dark brown I would mistake it as Chubacca This is totally awesome! Can you make the earpink a tad bigger? 04:29, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:32, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

She is spiky in lovely way xD Can you curve or shorten the fur on the chest above hind legs? ,17:45,January 6,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:18, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lionheart (Ki) - Tweaked
He needed mane of fur around his neck. OA is Icethroat21. Hmm it looks a little..like..I dont know xD ,14:48,January 6,2012 (UTC)

Noo now i saw there is limit 25..its over limit, you can decline it.. ,14:50,January 6,2012 (UTC)

Nah, you're fine. 16:10, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Mintfur (K)~Redone
Needed to match the other images and OA was Sandstar12. 21:39, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W)~ Redone
Need to match other images and OA was Feircestar. I basically just put the warrior lineart over the deputy image and add a few small tweaks. 21:39, January 6, 2012 (UTC)