Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Snooky(A) - Redone
OA is Iceheart, looked gray and black. Comments? I think I failed with th shading. x3 21:05, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still looks a bit grey. Define the shading and the eyes - I can't see them. 22:46 Mon Dec 24

Re-uploaded I redid the shading. owo 23:02, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, the light/depth in the eye, and blur the patches and if the wrong version is showing, just ignore   02:44, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading again, and I think the eyes are fine. owo 23:19, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes need to be lightened too. At a certain angle they look black. 00:01, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the edges more blurred than smudged, to match the other images? 01:23, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the patches look kind of pixily/sharp altogether, use a smoother brush to soften their look  06:02, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I'm actually not using the blur tool at all, I'm using the smudge tool to blur it all, I did the same on the kittypet. x3 05:55, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

The splotches still seem a bit pixel-y. Also, mind defining the shading some more? 19:43, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:09, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. 08:49, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the shading yet again. x3 01:53, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Some if the patches look a bit blotchy, just around the edges. Can you fix that? 20:42, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think the patches look fine. Shading could be darkened/defined more though, still rather flat. 07:51, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:26, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

I'm with Misty on the patches thing. 19:28, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match other images. Last OA be me. I will be away until the 1st, so this won't be worked on until then 04:54, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a tad gray on her right side. x3 15:49, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Dustpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Darkened the shading a bit. OA was Leafstrike. Comments? 19:08, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

Could you darken it a bit more on the lighter parts of the belly? 19:41, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Also, could you define it on the haunches. 00:48, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't really know on what you meant by just the belly, so I just darkened it on the lighter parts, if that was alright. o3o 20:49, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste between the legs. 17:31, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly define the shading on the tail. Good job, Misty. ouo 19:27, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (Ki) - Tweaked
Last OA was Rainfacestar. Just slapped on a new layer of shading. First charart up in awhile by me :P Psh, I think I made it too dark. 03:21, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing some, and it kinda looks like like the earpink's gone. xD 04:15, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened it and put a more visible earpink color on. 13:53, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit more? She looks almost grey and white. 20:32, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading, as well? Lovely job, Splook. 18:55, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks c: 20:01, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Smoky(KP) - Tweaked
OA was Wildheart. All I did was use the dodge tool to dodge away all of the grayness on the white, which in turn made the earpink light, so I ran the burn tool over that, then I added another layer of shading on the white. So, comments? I'm pretty sure changes aren't showing. x3  05:09, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Parts of the white on the back are still grey looking, could you fix that? 20:31, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit? 20:41, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly smudge the patch of white near the collar? 00:48, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I re-tweaked it, because it was bugging me. x3 17:27, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Hazeltail (Ki) - Redone
Last OA was DJ. Lotsa things wrong. Got the file from cloudy so not changing any of the colors. Don't think changes are showing. Comments? 04:57, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Do you thihnk you could maybe define the shoulder patches a touch? They seem a bit blurred compared to the warrior. 20:26, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

I actually kinda think they're less blurred than the warrior if anything. It's just a smaller blank. But if anyone else agrees, I'll happily change it. 01:53, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (A) - Tweaked
Same as all the others. Last OA was CinderxLion. I actually did end up needing to define the shading a bit after it was lightened, but I didn't tinker with it too much. Don't think changes are showing. Comments? 04:57, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to lighten the shading juuuuust a smidge?

I think the shading looks fine. It looks neat this way. 20:24, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Willowkit (CP) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I dulled the highlights and made her more black =P OA was Teldy. 06:52, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

There some waste stuffs around her. ouo

Re-uploaded. die waste 07:08, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Floss (KP) ~ Redone
Redone because reasons and OA was another user. Coemmntsa? 08:13 Sun Dec 30

Could you define the shading on the gray? 14:34, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:17, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine as is, imho.

Do you think you could lighten or darken that ear. Right now, it looks like it's not either white or the grey on the rest of the body, and looks like a whole 'nother color. 20:24, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail just a tad? 20:39, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 08:21 Mon Dec 31

Blur the shading a bit more, especially the tail and above our back right foot. 17:39, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowkit (CP) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked her to be dark grey and tweaked the shading. 01:04, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sheepy, stap leaving waste around your images. xD

Re-uploaded. i am not used to working with highlights n stuff weeps 01:17, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Whitewater (W) ~ Tweaked
OA be Splook. I made it lighter, and yes, this is tweaked.

Re-uploaded. Lightened her like I did the elder.

Define the tail shading? 04:52, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hate tail shading. x.x

Whitewater (E) ~ Tweaked
OA be Leafstrike. Seriously, these are tweaked. I just became best friends with the dodge tool. 8D

Re-uploaded. Okay I lightened the shading a bit more. I think she was a tad too dark.

Plumwillow (Alt A) ~ Tweaked
I did not redo it, I swear by the shipping of Nuna. Okay so it turns out I didn't have the xcf for this, because I didn't save it all those months ago. Tweak because reasons, and OA was some n00b called Berryflower123 (dunno who that is, but their chararts sucked =P). If it looks redone, it's because of the way I fail at tweaking with xcf's, but I had to redo the earpink because I failed and didn't check before blurring the old shading and stripes into the depths of hell. Comments? ouo 03:56 Mon Dec 31

I hate to say this, but I don't think she should get this. x3 The two times her and her siblings were seen she wasn't called out by name, she was just standing in that order when called that, they never called her that by name. It was like the Birdy, Pad, Little Mew and Raindrop chararts, they were just called the names and we assumed that they were in their order, though I believe only Little Mew was decided to receive one. So, in short I don't think she should get this, or her warrior alt2, unless I derped and she was definitely called out by that. Sorry, believe me I don't want to do this, the alt warrior2 was my first approved charart. x3  17:38, December 31, 2012 (UTC)