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Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie  Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade  Crystie  Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Reuploaded. I like the eye color of the apprentice pic more oof :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  13:19, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

What are the lighter blotches on her? Are those highlights? If so, tone them down (on the opacity bar). Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The pupils appear to be inconsistent in color- one eye has a darker black than the other. Shading is still leaking in some places. Don't worry! I struggle with that as well. Fill those blank areas with shading- I can provide a redline if you want. Smooth out the shading everywhere- just smooth out the edges with the blur or smudge tool, Gaussian Blur makes shading leak away, only use it if you want a really good shading gradient. You have unfilled pixels on > this side of the tail. Sorry for the wall of text! You're doing good so far! 22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Potato! <3 And thank you so much for the redline if you can provide!!! I feel so foolish… <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Here. Red= fill in/add shading. Blue= Remove shading to fit your light source. Green=Waste. Delete that. Yellow= missing/light pixels. Magenta= blur/smudge and tone down the highlights. Hope this helps! (if I mess up on the source sorry if I do). 22:31, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Aww thank you Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  03:40, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm it doesn't appear you did what I said. Did you reupload the right file? The only difference I see is that the highlight blotches are set to a higher opacity.. I meant to lower them, then blur/smudge. If you need any more help, let me know! 03:51, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof... maybe it's the .mpd file, I guess? :P Anyway :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

What is that on her belly? If that's shading depth you need to lighten it and blur/smudge it. Lighten the highlight spots on her legs more and then blur/smudge them. Smooth out the shading and make >> this pupil darker to match <<this pupil. Let me know if you need to elaborate! 13:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! :D School's so busy these days :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:46, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of brown in her eye and smooth the shading on her face.

Highlights are making her turn gray in some areas- if you haven't set them to overlay, you should as I think that should help. 01:35, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail please. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:08, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 0px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:47, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

The tips of her front paws are missing some color and her bottom is too. Her forehead has a dark smudge, I don't know if it's shading or part of her or a mistake.

17:15, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

It's shading :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  06:54, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

There's Gray littered about her, smooth shading on stomach, shoulder and on her forehead. Her set looks like it has a faint, paintbrushy texture. This also looks like it might be a bit of a different color than her set. This looks even sort of red. The texture is most notable on the warrior and can be found on File:Sorrelstripe.warrior.png <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:11, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes appear to be two seperate colors, one is more brownish than the other (>>> this one). 17:37, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh it's the first now! :O Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  12:58, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

The base is inconsistent on the tail, and the texture looks green. Draw 1-2px lines and smudge them in the direction of the fur. 13:01, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the backlegs should be smoothed

12:38, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  12:07, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture. 22:05, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail and darken it only a little bit.

01:31, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:37, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

define the texture a bit more? i still cant see it.

04:00, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think you should check for leaking shading, I see it in a lot of places. If you need a redline, just ask! 01:51, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh Potato please give me one :P <3 <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  11:53, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Here. 13:38, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  14:15, May 13, 2019 (UTC)

i'm sorry but what are those black specks around the art?

10:45, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

This looks much darkee than the apprentice, maybe recede some of the shsding and lighten the base a tad? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:47, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

The specks are texture I think. They need some smudging, just like shading. The base is really inconsistent (not sure if this repeats Mink's comment, sorry if it does)  22:13, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

the shading seems to have given the -> eye a brownish tint <span style="">05:14 Sun May 19

You still have a few days, but are you still working? 04:09, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

OS-3 elder 1 ~ For Evaluation
my first PCA image, I'm still learning Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:29, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

You need to have the heading be OS-3 elder 1- For Evaluation, since you are a kit in the project at the moment. Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink showing. 16:36, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for double commenting, but can you remove the waste around the elder? What I do is I use the lasso tool on the program I use and circle everywhere where there's darkness and hit delete. You can also use the magic wand tool, go to your transparent layer, select outside of the lineart, and go back to your base/shading layers and hit delete. 16:53, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded!Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:59, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink could use a lot of blurring/smudging at the edges. Define the shading on the face and ears, and define the shading depth. To do that, add a thinner, darker layer of shading. Can you give some variation to the stripes so they're not just facing the same direction and have the same width? Lastly, the stripes on the neck and back border on being a triangle tabby- a pattern that was ruled out for being unrealistic. I'd reccomend to make them more like the other stripes. If you need me to elaborate, let me know! 17:35, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The back/neck stripes look fine, but the one stripe on the shoulder connecting to the head does look out of place. I can redline if need be. Also the shading needs to be defined everywhere. r hearts  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <22:57, 5/05/2019> ​

this needs to be short-furred since they're windclan

Moonyy might be wrong and right. Thistleheart was WindClan and she had long fur. Can you darken the shading a tad?

windclan cats have to be short-furred unless specified otherwise, Thistlehesrt was specified to be long haired 16:25, May 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

You still have some time left, but are you still working? 15:08, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Darken the shading everywhere more.. 16:14, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

You forgot to sign your comment. Crop the image a tad? There's a tad too much space on << this side. -- 17:13, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink in the ear closest to us should cover more of the ear as well. -- 01:52, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the belly shading some and connect it to the bottom lineart. <span style="">02:54 Sun May 12

Still working?

Tornear (Elder) - CBA
I know this is rushed but wanted to get this up before my exams start. I'll darken the stripes and tweak the shading next upload. 16:20, May 13, 2019 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear. 16:49, May 13, 2019 (UTC)

There needs to be lots more stripes and they need to be thinned a tad as well. 21:50, May 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Can't believe I forgot TornEAR's ear lol 19:34, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

Nice job on the stripes, I know matching a Mounty image is no easy task. Could you possibly soften the stripes just a bit, though? They seem a bit softer when you compare it to his older elder image.

Re-uploaded - I tried softening the stripes, hopefully this is better. 16:25, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Changed shading and his eyes. 15:33, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on his head, chest, and forelegs? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:39, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Added depth to his face, and darkened it overall. 10:32, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading, please define it. 14:52, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Messed around with the shading. I might change it completely though. 15:22, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are lighter and softer

Re-uploaded - Made the stripes lighter and a tad softer. 09:29, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Badgerfang (Alt. K) - For Approval
05:52, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes a bit paler as with the gray, the gray on the apprentice seems a lot softer and scattered if that makes sense. Also could you possibly define the shading on the white? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:08, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:44, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the gray so it blends/fades into the white, like it is on the apprentice? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:02, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:00, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

The head stripes seem to be thicker and darker on the apprentice

Other paler pelts (star) ~ CBA
tried out blurred shading but will probably end up smudging it to smooth it out. just wanted to get it up before i get swamped in homework

reups ended up smudging the shading

Define the shading depth a little?

14:52, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if this is required, but could you smudge the shading in the direction of your texture? 15:25, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups tried my best with the smudging, but the source made me confused lol. i smudged my other star the same way though?

Add some light to the ears? 16:51, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

reups

CBA?

Blossomkit (OT) (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay, here she is; I might tweak the stripes <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:18, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

There seems to be an uncolored bit on the tail, on the part of the tail farthest to the right - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:37, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, oops I guess my brush didn't fill that part in. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:56, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Looking at the official tree, it no longer shows her as a gray tabby. She's now white. 21:37, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, huh well I much preferred her being a tabby but here she is. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:46, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg closest to us. 22:12, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

There is light there, with the tail and body covering most of it you wouldn't see very much light anyway. It's the same exact source I used for File:Baykit.kit.png <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:22, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

There would be light there and I think you should define it as well because the shading there is looking too blurred.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:15, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you still define the light on the foot? I can't see any at all, and the file history doesn't really show any change other than the shading being darkened.

Tom (KP) - CBA
This was incredibly fun to make  19:00, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Dang, well done in matching his other images. o.o That's no easy feat. Could you possibly define the shading? Moreso on the tail and limbs. ​​​​​

reup  02:39, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a line of texture right up next to the back lineart? There's just an out of place gap there. 16:55, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

reup!

CBA?

Clovertail (E) - For Approval
wasn't sure if i needed to extend the white up the shoulder any more, so feel free to let me know your opinions <span style="">02:28 Sat May 18

It should be fine, it matches the others. Could you smooth that shoulder shading and thicken it just a tad. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:50, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

I believe there is waste in-between the forehead whiskers, and I think there's some earpink on top of the lineart. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:16, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i got the whisker waste, but I didn't see any earpink waste <span style="">19:59 Sat May 18

the shading looks a little bit blotchy to me on the hindquarters? but if that's just the shading style then it's fine <span style="">14:04 Sun May 19

reuploaded i eased the transition a lil bit <span style="">17:49 Mon May 20

Lavenderkit (K) - For Approval
couldnt load the tree so idk what it looks like on there. if this looks 3000 off can someone screenshot it for me id appreciate it 03:16, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

The description is a silver cat with lighter spots. The base needs to be turned to silver, and you have waste under those feetsies ;)  03:18, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

reup *darker spots. i darkened the base a little, i did have the intention for her to be silver 03:27, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

This is so adorable, omg. Can you define the shading a tad and add some more depth? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:47, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

More waste on the tip of the ear, back and on the bottom of the tail.

17:10, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

reup changed a few other things. thanks mink 01:27, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna get shot for this, but the base doesn't look silver. This looks cream. 13:25, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

i dont see how it looks cream (and some of my peeps agreed with me)? i also like this color so id rly rather not change it and i can confirm that its literally only very slightly yellow. if other people think its cream looking then ill be willing to desaturate it but for now i just really, really dont see it (jfc i feel like im pulling the its fine card too much but like, i just rly dont see it??) 13:50, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

It looks fine to me imo, it looks silver enough. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:51, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

I actually agree with Potato on this one. I'm seeing more of a lighter cream instead of silver. Looking at unshaded places like the head makes it seem fairly obvious to me. ​

Looks silver to me, like nowhere near cream Malina457 (talk) 21:01, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

I’m agreeing with Potato and Jayce, this looks cream. I can provide a screencap from the website for the colours if that makes it easier? If not, shifting the hue to a more bluish tint for the base. Might make it look less cream.

reup youd kind of... literally need to place the color out of context to see the cream, but since apparently its so controversial i desaturated it a little. 00:30, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Burnt, that was definitely uncalled for. You even said yourself that you'd change it, so why the "apparently" comment. It even still looks cream to me, honestly. You need to tone it down with the "it's fine" comments, I'm seeing quite a fair bit coming from you and it needs to stop. Also, I think there'd be shading on the top of the head? I got told to add some to Breeze's kit, and mine had almost the same source as you. Also, do the colors for this match the family tree? They kinda need to. ​

While you're at it, the spots look like stripes. I think, like Ashfur and Ferncloud, that some stripes can be added, but I see no spots here. 22:44, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (Alt W) - For Evaluation
Comments? I can't do shading, so can any warrior help? Also, BG Color? Tigertastrophe (talk) 17:58, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Size the image down, please. The heading needs to be Boulder (Alt W)- For Evaluation, since you are a kit. 18:01, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

This also needs to match his other alts in the set, since this is from TUG. What program do you use? To make the background transparent, find the magic wand tool, select outside of the lineart, and hit delete. To add shading, pick a color and paint it on, set it to multiply (if you aren't using layers, please use them, they are useful) and lower the opacity. Then blur/smudge with the tools to make it a gradient. 18:09, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

I use the Paint Program on Windows. It doesn't have layer options. Tigertastrophe (talk) 21:05, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

You should use a program that allows you to use layers, such as GIMP (which is free), Photoshop, and Pixlr (also free). 21:41, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

When you do get layers, add shading and blur the colors a little.

00:52, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

I already tried downloading GIMP, but apparently my PC doesn't have enough space, even though I've deleted alot of files.. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:17, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Oo, wait hold up. Pixlr editor works, alrighty gimme a few days and I'll fix this warrior up. It may be late since I have exams, but I'll try otherwise. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:20, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Where do I place the shading? I checked apprentice tutorials, and it's not there. Tigertastrophe (talk) 16:09, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

here you go! 16:28, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, the Tutorials don't show how to shade the new warrior blank, just the old one. Here and here  are some examples. 22:45, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Swampkit (Ki) - CBA
RIP to him being ginger and white <span style="">18:01 Sat May 18

Smooth the tail shading?

Reuploaded <span style="">19:02 Sat May 18

Expand the tail shading. 20:12, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">13:15 Sun May 19

CBA?

Ratscar (E) ~ CBA
*screams* 22:37, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Livy (Kit) ~ For Approval
yeet one exam left

Smooth out the shading and define it on the tail. 16:52, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Quailkit (WC) (Ki) - For Approval
Let's try this again, shall we. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:14, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Turtlekit (Ki) - For Approval
Star isn't in use due to lack of a cite, meaning I don't need to match it. All pelt colors from the family tree itself. ​​

this gives me major vibes of my first oc, love it. could you smooth the facial shading a lil? <span style="">21:44 Sun May 19

Re-uploaded. You mean Splashpelt?? ngl I kinda took inspiration from that design as a nod to many eons ago.

With the sourxe, shouldn't there be some light on the neck/shoulder/stomach area? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:09, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

It's the exact same source as others have used above, and the one I used for File:Breeze.kit.png. Livy's kit also has about the same source as I do, and that's not one I did.

Luna (K) ~ For Approval
My cute little princess kitty 06:19, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Taylor (Ki) - For Approval
Was originally going to do Quietkit, but I saw they had a previous image so I figured they'd be done in June. So here's Taylor! Did my best to match the kittypet, but this also shows a different side. 16:52, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Were you able to get the colors okay? I can always shoot the kp file to you if need be. Also, the smudges are sharper on the kp, so could you possibly do that here as well? And the gray should also cover the eye here, it's meant to be one giant patch on the face. ​

Since they were born a kittypet, they need a collar. 22:36, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Add a bit of eye depth