Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 167

Mist Where Sunlight Shimmers (PH) ~ Approved
This is my fourth image, first ph. IDK if the speckles are too light...if so, any tips? :D 05:56, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Don't align your images. Also, define the speckles, earpink, and shading. 06:03, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry about the alignment, I am not able to change it on my computer so I have to go to my tablet each time I upload, and it's very late at night so I was lazy. Otherwise, I'll mostly define the shading everywhere but the main body, as I see it perfectly fine there. Tomorrow. And, again, any tips on defining the speckles? 06:21, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe try cdcdcd for the base and ffbc66 for the speckles. 06:34, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. Its looks a bit flat. It is also leaking on the belly by the hind leg. 14:31 Sat Feb 25

This should have mud on it, if I'm not mistaken. 15:29, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:57, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

If you look at the other prey hunter images, there's a loooooot more mud on it. How's a kitty s'posed to be camouflaged if he's only got a few mud specks on em? :P 21:10, 2/25/2017

Reuploaded -- 21:45, February 25, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the ginger speckles? I can't tell the difference between them and the mud very well

Reuploaded -- 03:03, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add or define some depth to the shading? 05:24, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

can you make the mud more splotchy or add more or smth it looks like brown patches right now 15:31, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:41, February 26, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:32, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I can see it fine? Second opinion? 22:17, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to darken it. It would probably also help with it looking flat. 22:33 Mon Feb 27

Reuploaded -- 23:59, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth? Also idk if it's just me, but the ginger specks seem to be the exact same color throughout and some are untouched by the shading. Is this intentional? If so, I highly suggest moving the specks below the shading layer. 19:37, 2/28/2017

I'll do that in a bit, but can someone just explain what the shading depth is again? It's not seeming to change. Also, Snow, you said "exact same colour throughout," does that mean you'd like me to change the color of the speckles or just the color of the ones in the shaded areas? Thanks :) 21:47, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

the shading should be much darker near the lineart and gradient out into the base colour, whereas this shading is the same throughout. something like that. 21:53, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:38, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 21:27, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 00:05, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

There's no image? o.O 03:58, 3/02/2017

What happened....? 04:04, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try reuploading again 04:11, 3/02/2017

Reuploaded Hopefully it worked -- 04:14, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, it's still looking a bit flat 13:24, 3/03/2017

Reuploaded -- 01:25, March 4, 2017 (UTC)

Renamed. Pleae use File:Mist.ph.png from this point on.

CBA? 01:32, 3/06/2017

Approved 02:21, 3/07/2017