Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Tallstar (R) ~ Redone
OA was me. redone to match official art

the belly on the deputy only seems to be on >> this side of the image, with black being under the front arms?

can you add some shading on the << front paw and smooth it on the >> front paw?

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Could you recede the white patch just slightly where it's right on the top of the haunch? It almost overlaps/touches where the tail starts, and the deputy doesn't show the two almost touch and all

The white needs to be removed from the back (cat's) right paw, according to the official description 23:28, 10/18/2019

Depending on what gets done with the nomination, he might not need any white paws. Please do not archive or make changes until the nomination is said and done. ​​

With the nomination having passed, the white paws and tail tip need to be removed to match his official art. 16:10, November 19, 2019 (UTC)

still working?

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Tigerstar (TPB) (K) ~ Redone


I think the stripes could match a bit more to Bramblestar’s kit, plus this needs the pale colours around the eyes and on the very light one on the muzzle.

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Stripes still don't really match on the legs from what I can see - so here's a flat version of bramble's kit without shading to show where the stripe placement is.

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Comparing this with the flat version that Max has for Bramblekit, the stripes still don't match. The dorsal stripe has four paler areas on the tail itself, whereas yours only has two (and three bigger stripes). The pattern itself is thinner on the kit as well.

The dorsal stripe shouldn't be on the shoulder, either. 16:23, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Re-uploaded yes

The stripes still look vastly different from the image Max provided; it needs to be stripe placement by stripe placement. What I did for Hawk's, I traced the stripes on Bramble's kit and worked from there. 01:42, November 11, 2019 (UTC)

The lightest part of the muzzle should also be reduced, it doesn’t reach that far on Bramble’s kit.

re-uploaded I traced the stripes

Could you thicken the "shoulder" stripes? The stripes on the lower portion of the haunch area still appear different orientation wise. There should also be five tail stripes (including the tail-tip) when it appears you have four here. The rustic color above the nose is also missing and the head stripes appear different. Do you have one of Max's file to reference from? 19:31, November 21, 2019 (UTC)

still working?

yes, lost the file and been pretty busy. I'll get to it soon.

Poppyfrost (K) - Redone
Challenge time. OA is Milliemoo, redone to match Sorreltail. -- 21:21, December 1, 2019 (UTC)

Eyes should be blue to match her set.

Oops -- 03:10, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes could be bluer to match the set. 21:02, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed I dodged them a bit. -- 23:08, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Small two notes: the brown triangle on the back (midsection) could be thicker per sorrel's kit, and the tail of sorrel's also has a slight jagged part about halfway down on the division of ginger and brown. If that doesn't make sense, lmk

Fixed -- 02:05, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Dovewing (W) ~ Tweaked
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Tallstar (A) - Redone
love this boy!! 17:26, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Forgot he hasn't got white paws, lol. 17:37, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget to remove the white tail-tip too! 17:42, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: oh yes! I've removed it now, thanks! 17:51, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

hey not to suck but I already had this reserved?

I feel like this should still belong to Max; no one has been regarding the tweak reservation timelines, and I think you should have messaged Max to ask them if they still wanted it.