Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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One-eye (W) ~ Redone
Feel so bad for her..Anyway Comments? Changes aren't showing. May have to go into file history..XD 00:46, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

If I'm looking at the correct version, blur the shading. 09:45, 15, 05, 2012

If I'm looking at the correct version, define the earpink. 11:17, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

The version on the page isn't the correct one...This is: http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120515000321/warriors/images/archive/1/1e/20120515004816%21One-eye.warrior.png 20:30, May 15, 2012 (UTC) Ignore this image, the top one is now correct.

The base pelt color seems a little...off. I suggest asking Paleh for the hex colors..

Blur the tail shading. 13:06, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry that I haven't been re-uploading..I've just been so busy. I'll re-upload tomorrow. 02:31, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded You might have to go into the file history. I fixed the tail shading but I haven't gotten the hex colors from Paleclaw so I don't want to change the color just yet. 00:50, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading (if it's the right one...) Skt Like a baws  23:29, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, too. 20:25, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 00:45, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) - Redone
I tried to match the stripes, Hope he looks good! 03:26, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

He needs a stripe going down his back, as he's a broken tabby (?), and the elder version has that. Also, darken the stripes //just// a tad. Nicely done, Raven.

Re-uploaded -- 10:08, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste and (maybe) blurred lineart above his tail. 20:18, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shouldn't be anymore waste :3 -- 22:24, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all along his back and under his tail. Also, define the tail shading, blur the haunch shading, and makes the tips towards the end of his tail less zig-zagged o3o  20:09, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading and stripes on the tail. -- 02:06, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match. Add more and make them all darker and thicker. 22:41, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the stripes. -- 20:02, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the white/pale muzzle and blur the face shading. 20:56, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

The shading and pale muzzle's fine. 21:09, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think the muzzle shading should be blurred, it looks gray right now. 21:20, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 03:23, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's some earpink waste in the other side of his ear where there isn't earpink... If that makes sense...XD 02:03, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) - Tweaked
*shrugs* Needed stripes. Also gave him pale undersides since it's the artist's choice. Only did this since it was my image. 18:20, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little, and maybe lighten them, so that they'll blend with the spots a bit better. Breeze whisker  02:09, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Ivy?

I am, sorry, I was having Internet issues. I'll reupload later. 22:14, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nvm, still having Internet issues. Hope this is ok *gulps* Otherwise I may not be able to reupload again. 22:02, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Patchpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Patchpelt as a kit. <3 Needed to be redone to match his other images. This is the uploaded version. Comments? 00:21, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cute<3 Define the earpink. 00:43, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink's the same as the warrior's earpink... 00:53, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

The patch on our left isn't quite so far into the chest on the elder image, and the front paw on our right is white. This is really good, Stoney. <3 Breeze  whisker  02:06, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

I can barely see the earpink. Perhaps enlarge it or something? Skt Like a baws  12:37, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Just a preference but blur the edges of the upper chest/neck shading. 83 06:51, 21, 05, 2012

Still working, Stoney? 20:25, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (E) - Declined


Dies* Ugh, Leafstrike, I'm sorry...Pelt color needed to be darkened...OA was Flamingmom3, and was tweaked by Leafstrike. *Dies* changes not showing, i don't think...but if you want them to show, you have to believe!~ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:57, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yes, i also made her muzzle look more white, because her old one looked like a highlight. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:03, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

The old one looked fine. And it looks like you pretty much redid everything, just run the burn (I think it's burn. Or is it dodge?) tool over it. No need to change the shading, or even the muzzle. 05:08, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

You know what, comparing it with the old one, this is redone. A few others agree with me. It was meant to be a tweak, so you have to tweak the old image or this will be declined. 05:21, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh, it's the burn tool. XD Anyways, this was redone, when it didn't have to be. Seriously, Maple. Take the burn tool over the image. It's not that hard. >.>

Reuploaded-Oh no! I'm sorry, thats what i did...I didn't mean for it to look like I re-did it.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:26, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Maple, I'd get it if you said you thought it was supposed to be redone... But you definitely did not just run the burn tool over it. Please don't try to lie to us when it's blatantly obvious. 01:41, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it more. And don't ever lie like that again, I have half a mind to decline this cause of that. 06:00, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Just because Paleh isn't going to decline it, doesn't mean I won't. Your newest upload shows that you're still going to be using the image you re-did, instead of the older file, which you //should// be using. This is declined because of being redone when it didn't need to be, and the fact you lied about it, twice.

Look in the changes. She actually did run the burn tool over the original image. 15:08, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yes she did, but that was only after we yelled at her for redoing it. And then she had the nerve to lie to us about something so blatantly obvious. This is definitely still declined. In fact, I'd like to take over. 16:33, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you need to decline it this time. She made the necessary changes - Greypool is now dark grey - even if she did lie about it. There's really no point in doing the same edit all over again. She just needs to watch what she says in the future. Breeze whisker  04:43, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (W) ~ Tweaked
Lol I got it back. OA was Ashshadow I think. Comments? 23:29 Sun May 20

Why is it being tweaked? 01:42, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

I forgot to mention that. The shading needed to be defined. 02:00 Mon May 21

Blue the earpink. 21:19, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck shading. Skt Like a baws  22:22, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes are here if they're not showing. This is as blurred as the shading can go now x.x 03:45 Tue May 22

Lighten the shading a little? Breezy pants  04:35, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Here 04:46 Tue May 22

Ferncloud (Alt. Q) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to be blurred and redone. OA was Mistfire. Changes can be seen here if the wiki's still on crack. xD

Blur the shading a bit. 01:03, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

Blur the tail shading~ 02:05, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, imho. But, if anyone else wants me to blur it, I will.

Actually can you blur all the shading a bit more? 05:55, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Broken Shadow (Q) - Redone
Took colors from her sharpclaw, but the pattern is screaming triangle tabby to me. I'd love to redo them both for pattern. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 02:18, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the belly "highlight" round-er... :3 02:30, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah...both of them are total triangle tabbies....anyway, define the shoulder highlight a smidge. 03:14, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP) - Redone
-is going to get eaten- Okay, it was in the tweak nominations page (though can't find it through the archives), but this could more than easily be an un-necessary tweak/a tweak instead of redo. OA was some Old Man, redone to match other images. Comments? o.e 07:30, 21, 05, 2012

I believe this was only supposed to be done by Trolly since she had the file, and was kinda doing it on preference. 08:19, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

She had her chance to do it, but she withdrew it, telling someone else they could work on it. Imho, I thought the image was fine, though.

Eh I don't really care that much, it's just pixels. XD If DJ wants to do it, why not? She speant time making it. ^^ Skt Like a baws  08:42, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. 21:17, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think you over blurred the patches just a tad. Try to make them seem more hard edge (I think that's the word o3o) like the other images. 21:26, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Ues a speckly brush on the edge of her patches. That's the only reason Trolly wanted to tweak it in the first place. That's what I did with her apprentice, a small galaxy brush ^^  22:00, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the patches a bit redder in color to match the other images and define the shading. Breeze whisker  04:33, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, not really red, but a brighter, oranger color. Breeze whisker  04:51, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Fail. But I tried. Comments? 10:14, 22, 05, 2012

Smudge the face patches more like her other images 11:41, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (W) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike and his tail needed to be fluffier. That's all I'm doing :)  05:41, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart a tad? It looks too spiky. 21:19, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Foxclaw (W) ~ Redone
Um yeah, it was originally gonna just be tweaked but then I looked up russet colored cats and found out it looked nothing like what I made so I redid it. OA was me. Comments? 14:02 Tue May 22

Wouldn't this still be considered a tweak since your the OA? e.e Lower the opacity on the ear pink. 01:30, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Well technically yes. But when I was done with this, there was absolutely nothing original left about it. 01:42 Wed May 23

Graypool (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Rainface, with a re-do by DJ. Needed to be darker..and it's a burn tool fail. XD

Blur the earpink and lighten the shading a bit 19:00, May 22, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I can't. I said I was going to use the burn tool, nothing more. Jesus, you guys don't listen


 * eye twitch* Gah, white pixels bothering me. >.< It looks more darker in some places than it does in some other places (fail at wording) can you make it a bit more.. Even? (fail at wording again)  21:18, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

That's because of the shading. I'd rather just re-do it, that way it's consistent. But, I can //try// and tweak it...not sure if that's exactly possible. xD

Re-uploaded. I adore the blur tool. And layers. They are lifesavers. <3

Make the nose gray to match her queen, and lighten the base pelt a little owo 02:17, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Graypool (Q) - Tweaked
Tweaked to be darker and I only ran the burn tool through it, so I'm not fixing anything else. Changes can be found here if they aren't. 20:57, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (A) ~ Tweaked
Meh xD Need stripes. Comments? 21:21, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot her facial stripes~ Skt Like a baws  22:28, May 22, 2012 (UTC)