Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Declined
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded Ikilledit 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't really match. Also lighten it so you can see the lineart, and add/majorly define the shading. 05:38, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink on the right. (Our right) 01:33 Sun Jul 15

Still working on this? o3o 02:53, 16, 07, 2012

Yes, re-uploaded. o3o 09:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't match. Take the eye and earpink color from her other images, add more mottles, and make them smaller. 00:44, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a leedle bit. 02:34, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks brown with black mottles...make her more black. Skt Omnia vincit amor  02:36, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this?

Regardless, it's past the two-week limit for redos. Declining and anyone with an empty slot may take over. 16:13, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over? 17:26, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Go ahead, Silv. 17:29, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Redone
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading a bit more. Unless changes aren't showing. 01:21, 12, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 20:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case the changes aren't showing here he is. 20:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

These stripes don't match the other images in the slightest. I know it's a kit blank and it's harder, but not even the stripe style matches. Would you consider redoing them? 20:59, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the base coat should be much lighter. Breeze whisker  04:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the fur, but I didn't redo the stripes because I think they are pretty similar if another person disagrees then I will try to redo them, but I don't have GIMP and I can't find the xcf file so I would have to redo the entire thing. Sorry, I really don't want to sound rude or anything. 21:23, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, look at this image. It's nowhere close to matching the others. If you don't redo this, someone else will. 02:25, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gotta agree Wild. They really don't look like the others. Breeze whisker  00:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving you my permission to redo this if need be. It needs to match. 04:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I probably need to thicken the stripes. And fix the earpink. 23:01, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes, smudge them a lot more, darken and define the shading. 00:33, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Change the pattern to match the warrior... 00:48, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the shading have a slight reddish/pinkish tint so it looks like the other images? 11:57, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Declining due to the one week limit for tweaks. If anyone has an extra spot, they may take over.

Reuploaded. There was no point in tweaking it since it would have been pretty much redone by the time I finished anyway. Breeze whisker  00:05, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a leetle more and define the shading. :3 08:14, 23, 07, 2012

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  00:22, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) - Redone
Shading made no sense. Last OA was Shelly. Took the shading from Willowpelt and the colors from her apprentice. Comments? 00:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it/define it on her tail just a tad bit? 02:47, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same as the shading on Willowpelt, so I'd rather not.... but how do you blur and define shading? 0.o 06:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it then make it darker. 17:19, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? o.0 08:21, 23, 07, 2012

Honestly, the shading looks fine. As Paleh said, it's the same as Willowpelt's - so then what's the point of changing it. 10:15, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I defined/darkened the shading on him. OA= Bramble, than redone by Rowan. Changes aren't showing yet. >.> Comments? 19:29 Sun Jul 15

Changes are now showing! :) 22:39 Sun Jul 15

Can you make the earpink color match the other image and make it more triangular? 02:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadedo.o The earpink is straight from the other image, but I made it more triangular ;). I can't fix the one on (our) left because it'll erase the pelt colour. 03:10 Mon Jul 16

I still can't see the shading very well. To me, he seems darker on his kit image than his apprentice. Not sure if that's just me being a derp though  04:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, do you want me to try and fix it or are you as onfused as I am now? :P 14:54 Mon Jul 16

Maybe you want to lighten his base coat a couple shades? 15:43, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do that when I get home. :) At the library! Woo! High-speed here :P  15:52 Mon Jul 16

Still working on this?

Yea,did I not say I would be away from Teusday 'till today? 23:41 Fri Jul 20

Re-uploaded 00:22 Sat Jul 21

Blur the shading. 21:33, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Just wondering (This is probably a dumb question but bear with me here) but since I was away for 4 days, without internet access, will I still get my full week of time? 14:05 Sun Jul 22

Blossomkit (Ki) - Declined
Ew, blotchy shading. Anyways, I just added a layer of shading over it. OA was Sandy, with a tweak by Ice and Leaf-storm. Comments? 19:58, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading right over her left leg. Looks good! Breeze whisker  23:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading over left leg. And thanks. :) 03:07, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her head and chest. 17:18, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Declined on request. Icy said she'll repost over the weekend.

Poppydawn (E) ~ Tweaked
Oh god I hate this image x.x I redid the stripes so she could match her other images better, comments? >.< 17:09, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, or lighten the shading in that area. 21:16, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened it a tad, but I rather not change it too much because it matches the other images. 14:03, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is probably just me... but lighten the stripes to match. Also just a preference but you could tint the shading to match a bit more. owo <span style="">08:02, 19, 07, 2012

The stripes don't really seem to match the queen and warrior. (In style, not opacity.) <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  02:28, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know... I guess if another person agrees, I'll fix the stripes. 15:22, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Just add a few thin, long stripes where there is room. That's what I usually do for thin tabbies and for her  17:38, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added a few stripes. 17:44, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Graymist (Q) ~ Redone
Fuuuuuuuu-- why'd you make the one pattern that Photoshop hates, Leggo? :c Anyways, redone for unnatural stripes. Most recent OA was Specklestream. Comments? 00:57, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Pretty! :3 03:45, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. c: Thanks Misty. 13:09, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more shading on her tummy and on her neck. Looks good. ^^ Breeze  whisker  17:49, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just redid the shading overall, it bugged me so much. 13:28, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and tail. 17:03, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hattie (KP) - Redone
Uh, yeah. OA was Icethroat with a redo by Mistystar. 00:56, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Add/define the shading on her front and back legs? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  01:45, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:29, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (Ki) - Tweaked
same as warrior and mc. Comments? 17:06, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste in between the tail and chest fur. 23:18, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on our left a bit. 23:20, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Dovewing (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and since I still had the file, I just redid the shading.

Can you lighten her just a bit? It looks darker than her other images. 15:14, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Icecloud (Ki) ~ Withdrawn
OA was Frostheart, and I attempted to define the shading.

Blur the shading 02:26, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define it a tad more? 15:11, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hate white cats. e.e

Can you lighten the shading? (Or blur it, whichever one you want to do.) 22:44, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur. And darken the highlight//lighter parts on face and chest. 23:05, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There aren't any highlights with this, and I think it's blurred enough. However, I did lighten it a tad, since it does look a bit dark for a white cat.

Define the "highlights" on the legs and tail. Breeze whisker  00:26, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

This image is giving me a major headache. I'm withdrawing to work on something else.

Thistleclaw (A) - Tweaked
Tweaked to have shading Defined. Most recent OA was Mounty. Comments? 23:04, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define it on the haunch and the back a bit more? 17:00, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Voletooth (W) ~ Redone
Redone because of stripes. OA was Mistystar. Comments? 23:17 Sun Jul 22

darken the shading 23:20, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Blur where the brown meets the lighter brown. 23:21, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D 23:29 Sun Jul 22

Voletooth (A) - Redone
This was fun. 8D Redone to match the others. Breeze whisker  01:06, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the texture on the brown parts. Lovely! 06:07, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Where? The whole thing is brown. XD (This is Breeze, my phone won't let me log on.)

The brown brown. You know? o3o 16:11, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a small spot of waste on his back. 23:52, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I think I got it. xD Breeze  whisker  00:19, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded by the way. Breeze whisker  00:23, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Tweaked
Just fixing the cream. Let's see... OA was Sandwich 989, with a redo by Icy, a tweak by me, another redo by me, and then a tweak by Ivy. 15:23, July 23, 2012 (UTC)