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Morningflower (Ki) ~ For Approval
How do you people charart?? How the **** did I charart??????? How did I kit blank? o.O

Did you have the file? I got the file from Fox a while back if you need it :) 13:13, 9/05/2016

Nope lmao I completely forgot there even was a thing called files and just absolutely screwed this into a mess xP it'd be great if you can send the files to saito.yukina@gmail.com ^^

Sent! 13:48, 9/05/2016

re-ups Received~thx ummm.... that's... not a lot of layers

Define the shading? It's a little hard to make out. 19:03, 9/07/2016

re-ups I thought it looked fine on my screen, but it this better now?

Violetpaw (A) - For Approval
Precious magpie-kitty. All colors are from the kit file.

Define the light source? On the legs/paws the shading is on the right, but on the head and shoulder it seems to be on the left.

she's gonna need amber eyes too, jayce. 15:13, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

She's also supposed to be white with black splotches. This seems to be the other way around. 03:07, September 7, 2016 (UTC)

seems fine to me, especially with the kit included. also with the rogue to be I've seen it's very much more white than black. 03:11, September 7, 2016 (UTC)

Yup, there's more white than black, but I can tweak the pattern on parts not visible on the kit tomorrow if that works?

Precious kitty. Anyways add some more shading. -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 07:01, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

To be honest, I think the shading is fine. It just looks like there's not a lot because Violet's a black-and-white kitty. 12:43, 9/08/2016

Re-uploaded. The source is fine, as all of my apprentices posted before this have the same shading source, and absolutely no one has made me change it before now. I think it's because of the darkness of her pelt. I also tweaked the pattern in places that mean I wouldn't have to tweak the kit.

Whorlpaw (App) - For Approval
Lily thorn  00:31, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

he needs to be longhaired. 01:21, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

ignore that 01:21, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

Can you possibly make the texture on the shoulder a bit more "in the fur direction"( wth does that even mean )? Right now it's just diagonal lines across.

'''Reuploaded. '''I wasn't very happy with his overall texture so I redid it. I also darkened the shading a bit. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   13:16, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

I see a line next to the ear xP I don't know what it is, but it's gone when you click into the image??? Am I the only one who sees that line o.O

Oh! yes it was a line, it was one of these '/'. Whoops. Removed it. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   15:28, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

Possibly add some more shading on the belly? 12:44, 9/08/2016

Reuploaded.  ~P   a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   13:50, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

I meant the spot where there's no shading :P In your lightsource, it would be shrouded in shadow. The spot right next to the back leg. 13:56, 9/08/2016

Reuploaded. Oh, okay. I think I got it this time. Should I lightning it a bit? ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   14:57, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

This should be "For Approval"; getting an image approved is not required to advance from kit to apprentice. You just gotta know what you're doing.

Brighten the white a little bit. I know that it is in the shadow, especially on the belly, but images tend to get nominated for tweaks due to the white looking too gray. Set the white on the image to pure white and then take the shading layer and go over the white in a slightly lighter tone. That tends to fix it. It looks really gray in some areas right now. The shading darkness is perfect, just lighten the white. 15:06 Thu Sep 8

Reuploaded. I didn't even realize I was an apprentice! anyway, is that good, or should I lightening it a tad more? I also added a bit more texture to the belly. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   18:32, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Flowerpaw (SC) (App.) ~ For Approval
01:17 Tue Sep 6

The shading's seeking from the.... butt/hind leg/tail area, and can you unblur the shading overall to define the shading and light source a bit more?^^

Excuse me if I'm mistaken, but isn't she supposed to be silver? This looks relatively close to a darker gray. 03:27, 9/06/2016

Re-uploaded 00:32 Wed Sep 7

I think possibly get rid of some shading? It's really hard to make out the silver on multiple screens. Also, if possible, define your lightsource and possibly lighten the shading a tad. 00:38, 9/07/2016

The base still looks incredibly dark for a silver/silver-gray cat. 15:08 Thu Sep 8

Re-uploaded 23:17 Thu Sep 8

Could you define the light on the image?

Re-uploaded 23:20 Fri Sep 9

Snakepaw (A) ~ For Approval
-- 21:48, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste making a full ring around the image. Also, I can barely see the shading on a few different screens

Reuploaded Ugh I erased it but it won't go away! It's happened before; I think I have a glitch on Pixlr... :/ -- 01:12, September 7, 2016 (UTC)

She needs stripes. 05:11, September 7, 2016 (UTC)

she's very neon, maybe make her a bit duller. 05:18, September 7, 2016 (UTC)

Waste is still there -- try erasing on all your different layers and further out, since the waste is making a ring around the cat so you'll have to erase further out. That and I can't see the shading on the front --> paw

Re-uploaded Re-did shading, and I can actually slightly see the ring of un-erased waste and I actually erased it but it still didn't go away... :/ --  21:52, September 7, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, it's still there. What program do you use? 02:31, 9/08/2016

Heading changed to "for approval", since you already posted an image or two before.

The hind leg's shading looks cut off.  ~ Silver Cloud ~   14:53, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define your light source? I'm having trouble distinguishing it. As well, add some depth to the shading. <span style="">15:10 Thu Sep 8

Shading seems to be leaking on the back near the hind leg. 15:31, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

I apologize if it is not my place to say this, as I am not a lead, but this doesn't have a date on the reservation table... <span style="">19:19 Thu Sep 8

Re-uploaded, added date and I use Pixlr. --  21:24, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Hmmm... I don't think your upload went all the way through, because although you said 'Reupoladed', the upload history doesn't show as such. Anyway, waste is still there and the hind leg shading is still cut off. Worst case scenario, you could always download another app/program to get rid of that waste if Pixir can't do it real quick

dang it forgot now actually re-uploaded

The shading on the hindpaw looks like it cuts off, add some there so it blends in with her main fur color. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   23:45, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Waste is still there, and also, is the nose filled in? I can't tell. Also the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back.

''reuploaded erased shading waste a lot more too. bet it didn't work ;-;''' --  20:50, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Nightpaw (RC) (App) ~ For Approval
I don't really like how the shading turned out on this... Took colors from kit

Can you define shading on the shoulder and hind leg a bit more?

A lot of the shading appears to be leaking. Also, could you define the shading depth as well as smooth out the shading some more? <span style="">19:00, 9/07/2016

Reuploaded

Tigerheart (D) ~ For Approval
All colors from warrior, from what I picked off of it. Also, is it just me, or does this look too light to be considered dark brown? <span style="">18:55, 9/07/2016

I honestly think it's fine... Me too, (Bluedragon64 (talk) 03:52, September 8, 2016 (UTC)).

It's fine, this is darker than Brokenstar, and that is still considered dark brown. Anywho, define the shading on the legs? <span style="">15:12 Thu Sep 8

Honeypaw (VS) (A) ~ For Approval
I screwed up on the splotches and eyes, I'll fix them when I can. Also, morale: don't close down your computer without closing your tabs, as you could lose important work...like this post. -- User:Neon Skylite/Sig

Neon, you're supposed to wait until the image you had first is archived before putting another one up. <span style="">11:53, 9/08/2016

It's fine, everyone is allowed one time. That being said, this should be "for approval", since you already posted at least one image before.

Smudge the earpink, smudge the shading and lighten it?  ~ Silver Cloud ~   14:51, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, in that case, could you smooth out the yellow splotches some? <span style="">15:07, 9/08/2016 15:07, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the stripes just a little bit? They are very hard to see. They aren't incredibly dark on the kit, but they are more visible than they are here, if that makes any sense. <span style="">15:14 Thu Sep 8

needs a white pixel in each eye. 18:37, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups I tried putting the lines on another layer so I could attack the splotches with my blurring tool viciously make more blurs without ruining the stripes. --

Can you blur the shading more? <span style="">06:42 Fri Sep 2016

Just curious as to know why there's tabby fur in her ear? <span style="">22:28, 9/09/2016

Beenose (Star) ~ For Approval
Dunno if she really died but there she is 19:48, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the texture? <span style="">21:54, 9/08/2016

Juniperclaw (Ro) ~ For Approval
man its been forever — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:04, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   20:34, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Tree (Lo) ~ For Approval
Comments? 22:07, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad more? And forgive if I'm mistaken, but do yellow cats get tabby stripes? I don't think they would, but again, just ignore me if I'm wrong. <span style="">22:26, 9/09/2016

Reuploaded. I always thought of yellow cats as being similar to golden cats, where, if the artist chooses to, they can add stripes, even if they're not described as tabbies. However, if others disagree with me, I'll remove them. 22:41, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Leafpaw (VS) (A) ~ For Approval
22:27, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Nettle (VS) (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ehhh  <span style="">22:27 Fri Sep 9 

Maybe define the tail shading and the shading on the right paw furthest from us

Make him a bit browner, as he looks slightly gray-brown to me. Overall though, you did a great job! 22:43, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Strikestone (W) - For Approval
So beautifully overly complicated. <span style="">22:47 Fri Sep 9