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Mousefur (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
She was shown to be a light brown in The Darkest Hour, so Comments? 13:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Lighten it up and blur it. 22:06 Mon Jun 18he shadin. Skt Like a baws  13:38, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color a bit more. 15:10, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

A lot more actually. This is in no way light, it's the same color as her main image. Also desaturate the earpink and thicken the shading on her neck/shoulder. 15:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png.

Reuploaded 20:24, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Nice, Moonshine<3 Blur the earpink and shading a bit and rename it File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png Just take away one .png. 20:29, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just a tip from an old coot. ;) I advise, with lighter cats, adding a second layer of shading where the shadows would be darkest, like at the base of her tail, back of her head, behind her front legs, etc. It gives the charart a more three-dimensional look and feel that might help out a bit. 20:37, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I changed the heading, since Mousefur already has an alt warrior. This is the second alt.

This should be called File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png. No need for the extra .png. Blur the earpink and shrink it. 00:01, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 06:20, 31, 05, 2012

Define the neck and haunch shading. 08:26, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" on the face and tail. 05:45 Sat Jun 2

Shrink the ear pink and make it more triangular.

Moon was having issues, so I uploaded for her. 18:11, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, blur it, and center it in the ear. 19:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:31, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, it's very sharp-edged. 22:27, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. 21:40, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Now they are ;) 22:28, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. It looks a little too close to the bottom of the ear.

Still working on this? Skt Spoilers... 22:32, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Rowan helped a lot. 19:55, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and there's some...darker color around the earpink. Also, make the earpink less...pink. 18:41, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:13, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think I'll CBA this since it's been sitting here for a little bit without a comment. 19:27, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but that ear pink still bothers me a bit. It needs to be blurred a bit more. Other than that, the rest of the image is fine. ^^; This next part is //totally optional//, but could you define the shading just a tad?

I think there's waste on the edge of the image. 19:36 Tue Jun 12

Reuploaded I blurred the earpink to the max. if I blur it anymore, it'll look weird. 20:04, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, make it more triangular, maybe that should help a little, I'm not going to tell you to blur it more. 20:08, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

There also still seems to be some darker color around the earpink; please fix that. 22:53, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the brown just slightly less golden, and get rid of the blurred lineart on the ear. 22:33, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this?

Yes, Reuploaded 01:51, June 17, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Can you lighten her up a bit, since this is ment to be light brown, it doesn't really seem like that to my eyes. 03:48, 17, 06, 2012

There's a few pixels of waste a bit in front of her chest. 09:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts? 14:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:31, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading some more and thicken it on the shoulder. 01:25, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the ear closer to us. owo 15:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:39, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mooon, I really love this.<3 CBA? 22:02, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Er sorry to interupt but can you make the haunch the same color as the shoulders? Try erasing some of the shading at the middle of the haunch and blurring it. 22:06 Mon Jun 18

Also blur the shoulder shading and define the earpink. 22:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing CBA? 23:55, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make it less green and blur the shading all around more. 02:30, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, it looks like it's all in shadow 14:56, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:02, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you extend the shading on the shoulders, and define it on the haunch?

Moon was having issues again, so I reuploaded for her. 17:12, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the shading more. 05:58 Sat Jun 23

Are you still working on this? 01:47, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Poor Moon. her computer is having Wikia issues. ._. I re-uploaded for her again, and she said she blurred it to the max.

Define the shading on the right front-leg, and maybe add some depth to the "highlighted" part on the chest. It's a bit flat. 17:52, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it up even more as it still looks too dark. 09:36, 26, 06, 2012

Nightstar (E) - Declined
Comments? 00:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Enlarge the lighter area on the haunch, and blur the shading on the face a tiny bit. Lighten the shading a smidge, too, as I can barely see the lineart. 00:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I can't really tell the light source, you might want to redo the shading. 03:38, 17, 06, 2012

Blur the earpink a bit, and maybe add more depth to the shading - it looks pretty flat right now. 09:43, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit? Also, lighten up the shading on his back/haunch, I can't see the lineart there. 14:54, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 14:58, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Storm, still working? 20:37, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. There's no light source (or it's coming from underneath?) and the shading is blotchy and looks like it's spray-painted on. You have a week. 20:59, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded better?

If I am looking at the correct version, the shading still looks blotchy. 21:24, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

I suggest adding highlights on the haunch, shoulder and face to try and smooth out the shading a bit, and if you put your shading on the same layer as the base color (if you use GIMP) use the free select tool to select your shading and guassian blur from there. ;) See if that helps. 02:56, 23, 06, 2012

You still need a light source. Try shading the parts that you think would be in shadow if the sun was... you know... above him? 02:07, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

There's major waste.-- 13:47, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

\Reuploaded 13:58, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:00, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink.

Blur the ear pink a bit, too. 20:23, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste. Tilt your screen back.-- 20:25, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

He kinda looks dark gray owo Darken it just a tad~ 08:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded... I colorpicked from the most neutral spots on the body, and since the shading on the leader is quite dark, I'd kind of like to keep it this way, but it's up to you all. 14:50, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the waste, blur the shading, and define the shading on the head. 15:41, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail and belly so that the lineart can be seen and blur the earpink some more 21:56, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken your light source. 22:01, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Storm, but it's been a week and I still don't think this is 80% done. Declined. 06:05, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt. A)-Under Evaluation
He has one for the kit, and the cite is real this time. I double-checked with some people in chat. Described as ginger. Comments? 19:04, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. 19:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color more ginger-y. He looks brown, and define the shading and highlights. 19:09, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And fix the earpink on both ears. The pink is covering little bits of lineart. 19:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink's match and redder 21:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I should know it's real, I added it. XD anyway, there's lighter ginger on his face, so maybe make the body that colour? Skt Spoilers... 22:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. You have barely any shading, there's no light source, there's miscoloured lineart, and I can hardly see the stripes. You have one week. 02:35, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

And just a warning, it's currently being discusses whether Brackenfur and Thornclaw's main description should be ginger, so this may end up being declined.... we'll have to wait and see for other's opinions on the discussion, but technically since they were first mentioned as ginger, it's quite likely they'll be changed. 05:56, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, why would it be declined? If it was changed, couldn't this just become the normal apprentice? Skt Spoilers... 06:02, June 27, 2012 (UTC)