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Bluestar (D) - For Approval
Had trouble with the eyes, I'll redo them in the next upload, be nice if I did something wrong. --Gardenglaze 02:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

ear should be ripped. 02:30, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please reupload under File:Bluestar.deputy.png? Your original file has two .png's, so I renamed it, but please upload under this file name. 03:00, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure velvetmoon has already got this reserved. 03:20, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I should quit this and let velvetmoon take over? --Gardenglaze 04:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I apologise if this offends anyone. But I do have both Bluestar and Oakheart reserved. I will be posting the images soon. 15:05, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Upload thought I would just upload on this. 20:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading. 21:19, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe give it a little more depth towards the base of the tail? Some volume, so to speak? 22:49 Mon Jun 27

crop this to the lineart. 21:11, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make sure it consistently fills the area 04:13, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Got it to look better with smudged shading though I'm not 100% sure I like it. 12:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 12:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the butt please?  18:42 Wed Jun 29 

Reupload butt shading has been expanded! :) 10:21, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth out the head and tail shading a bit? 02:47 Fri Jul 1

Reupload 08:59, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more. 21:19, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smooth as I'm gonna get it! 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks really hard edged compared to all her other images. Are you sure you can't smooth it more, or maybe even lighten it? 01:43, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I thought shading was an artists choice. But I blurred it insted of smudged it so it matches. 05:54, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. Also, shading is artist's choice.

Reupload I smoothed it a lot more now I hate it but if smooth shading is what you want here you go! 09:45, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the image should be cropped... 16:16 Fri Jul 8

Um it is cropped. 17:41, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light a lil on the near back foot? Also, it might just be me but I think the shading's leaking from the lineart a bit on her tail.  21:36 Sat Jul 9 

Shade more along the bottom edge of the cheek, if that makes sense? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:28, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be cropped to the lineart. There's too much extra space on <-- side of the image.

Reupload I can't crop it anymore or else the tail Will be gone. My program only allows for even cropping on both sides. I don't see why I have to crop it when the lineart artist can't? 09:32, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and maybe expand it a little. 13:43, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 14:41, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Right now the shading is too hard edged, can you smooth it more? 20:55, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload  23:52, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. I'm not saying blur it, but look at the various other images that have smudged shading and see what they do.

Reupload 16:49, July 13, 2016 (UTC) I can't work out why I'm struggling so much! 16:49, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Did you accidentally hide the earpink layer under the base? I can't see the earpink... 17:41, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading; it looks very rough right now --  19:33, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. Unless when you smooth it out you plan on making it more of a gradient. And perhaps lighten it a tiny bit. Not much, just a few ticks. The shading is so solid and that might be why it looks flat. 19:47 Wed Jul 13

Reupload Played around with the shading but I'm not going to lighten it unless someone else says. 21:44, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be smoothed out more but I don't think it needs to be lightened. 00:59, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry but what do you mean by smooth it out? It's smudged shading and there is other images on this wiki with shading that needs smoothed out more than this. I can't smooth it out unless I make it blurred shading which I hate! Please can someone explain why it needs to be smoothed out and what that is meant to look like. 09:27, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

It's too hard-edged, clashes a fair bit with the rest of the image. As Sunjaw said, it should be more like a gradient. Look how it is on this, this, this, this, this, or this (David's are a good example because he's been doing it for ages). Many of these are smoother and have a gradient-like look. Your doesn't, and is hard-edged in places it shouldn't be. It does need to be smoothed out a lot- note how we're not saying to blur it. Nowhere were you ever told to do that. It's difficult to do smudged shading on a solid cat, so you'll need to find something on your own that works.

Reupload I give up! I just used blurred shading! I hate it but I guess that doesn't really matter. 13:24, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

Velvet, calm down. No one ever once told you that you needed to blur your shading, and you're making it sound like we're forcing you to do so, and you're overreacting and acting like we don't care. =/ You asked for examples and I gave you some, so there's no reason to act like we aren't listening to you. Smoothing it out can also be accomplished by just smudging it more. Say if you smudge something in an upwards direction; smudging it in a left to right motion can also smooth that out to make it less hard-edged. Using a size one brush to smudge will also help.

Hold up! I never said anything about being forced to use blurred shading. All I meant was it was the only way I could fix it. I have been smudging it more this whole time! It's not working for me so I just blurred it! I have funnily enough been doing everything you said and it just hasn't worked for me! I don't know if it's because I'm out of practice or what. But I'm not complaining I'm just done being told yo smooth it out more when I can't see what you mean. 18:41, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading slightly on the left-back leg?

Reupload 21:03, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) ~ For Evaluation
Here's hoping this one gets approved ;) -- 21:01, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading? 1:06 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded --  01:27, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Could you tone down the earpink? It seems very neon atm. 01:41 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded -- 02:51 July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his face a little more noticeable? I know it's there, but I can barely see it. 07:57, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

should this guy even have an image? his page only says 'a dark tom', which could mean any colour. 09:40, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you lighten him. His previous image was grey and this looks black. 09:49, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Matching the previous image is not required. Also, I'm not sure if he should have the image either, tbh.

Because of his name, and the way his description is phrased, I think his stripe should be lighter than his base, personally. 15:41 Thu Jul 7

That's an assumption, though. It's fine being darker or lighter, and we don't make descriptions match what we think it could mean... it's fine as it is.

Re-Uploaded --  17:39, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink? Also on the topic of "should he even have an image", I think it's relevant to point out that Rubblepaw is also described as a dark tom and he doesn't get an image.  20:26 Thu Jul 7 

Re-Uploaded (Shouldn't discussions go on PCA talk page like the should Silvermask have an image?) --  20:34, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

He looks black to me, I can't see anything on this image bar the ear pink. Also, the ear pink is a bit neon.

Re-Uploaded --  16:19, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? --  18:12, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

There seems to be an un-filled white pixel on the right-ish side of his face

Re-Uploaded --  00:23, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add more eye depth? (Basically add a darker green on the edge)

Re-Uploaded --  18:47, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

I cannot tell what is shading (if there is any) and what is markings. If there is shading, define it and define your light source, as I can't distinguish one atm. 19:50 Wed Jul 13

On his page it says he's got a grey stripe but I don't see the stripe could you possibly add it or if its there define it. 20:36, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded (As for the stripe, it is there but it is black because the other images have it black. --  18:56, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

What other images? He doesn't have any other images, and since this is his only one, shouldn't it reflect his description and have a gray stripe? There's also waste along the back

Re-uploaded (I meant his previous deputy blank. The artist made it black?) --  20:46, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Since this is his only image, I'm pretty sure it needs to show the grey stripe. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 23:14, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Hi, OA of the previous image here. It was made using a dark gray (but a lighter dark gray, not more of a neutral) base, and a darker gray for the stripe. That wasn't black.

Re-uploaded --  20:40, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

The stripe could be blurred/smudged. Also, there appears to be waste above his back and at the base of his tail. 13:14, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --  17:20, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

There's still bits of waste on the back, and also I'm fairly sure a lump of lineart is missing at the base of the tail.

Bramblestar (D) - CBA
Since I did most of his images all the colors are from them. 01:24, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading? 02:42, 07/10/2016

I'm pretty sure the bottom of his tail shouldn't be lighter in color, it isn't like that on any of the other images. 13:42 Sun Jul 10

You're missing the dorsal stripe on the top part of the tail, and Maple's right. The pale part shouldn't be on his tail. Also, the pale parts on the leader look a bit more blurred than this does.

The pale part is like that on his deputy (his former deputy) but sure I'll remove it since this is technically a redo. 16:19, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Sorry if this looks weird, his image is extremely dark on my screen so it's hard to see it properly. 02:09, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Forgot the dorsal stripe, sorry, I'll add that in the next upload. 02:21, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 00:58, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Shellheart (D) - for evaluation
Leaking shading will be fixed later.

I know i sholdn't ask this yet, but please, could you start posting your comments? I'm leaving on friday 15, so I don't have much time. Falcon 49 (talk) 12:13, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

I get that you're leaving, but it clearly says to not ask for comments until three days have passed. If you continue to do this, your image will be declined in the future. That being said, there's waste around the entire image, and please do not thumb or align your images.

Can you define the pattern on parts where the image is shaded? It's very hard to see in those areas. Maybe tinting the shading will help.

'''Reuploaded. '''Falcon 49 (talk) 13:13, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Hey, this needs a date on the chart to be a complete reservation

It's ok, I'll add the date Falcon 49 (talk) 13:17, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Falcon 49 (talk) 13:26, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the lighter part in his pelt it doesn't match his other images. Also there is waste by the tail. 09:23, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Falcon 49 (talk) 09:47, July 14, 2016 (UTC)'''

There seems to be many unfilled white pixels around the edge of the lineart

Could you define the shading a little? 15:28, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there's shading leaking outside of the lineart around the lifted front leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:46, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Alt. D) - CBA
Comments? 13:10, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

Shading looks to be leaking near the belly/haunch area. There's a lighter spot there where it should be darker.

Reuploaded. If you mean the lighter area above the eye, he has that in the manga. 13:24, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

No.... I was talking about the belly area, as I specified. I already knew about the lighter area above his eye and how it's supposed to be there. Define the overall shading a bit.

Reuploaded. Ah, I see. Sorry, I just thought you were talking about two different things. 13:29, July 13, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Blackstar (D) - For Approval
Do not comment on the fact he's missing the patchy fur. I already know and I'm working on a way to get it to work with this blank, plus the fact I suck at those kinds of things.

Re-uploaded. Eh, might ask David for a bit of advice on this one... I can't do patches.

Make the scars a little more pink, just to match the other images.Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  21:51, July 18, 2016 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) - CBA
will fix hard-edged shading later 00:41, July 14, 2016 (UTC)
 * Re-uploaded 01:31, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

There's a bit of shading that looks hard-edged on the back paw closest to us. 15:32, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:38, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Mistfeather (Ki) - For Approval
01:31, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Does this have a blue tint? If not, it should. -- 20:48, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

tint doesn't have to match. :/ 20:58, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

I was previously working on this and I was told it had to match so....-- 21:52, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

why should it? as long as the texture itself matches thats all that matters? (and obviously doesn't throw off the colour a ton) 21:58, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Shading tint has never been a matching requirement. You were probably told about the base color and texture color, not the shading. The shading is fine, although maybe a tad bit thick... but I know Scar likes thicker shading, so I'm not gonna say to tweak that. =P


 * so do I fix something...? :P 22:04, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

Not unless there's a valid reason for the tint to be changed. In this case, it's not really distorting the color that much; you can tell it matches.

Well fine, but I was told it was needed for this art and blue and black should be smudged for the shading so ... :/ -- 22:33, July 14, 2016 (UTC)

That is not what you were told. I just checked the archives, and they were talking about the texture, which is blue. Scarlet is not required to tint her shading, but I think... dear, would you like the file for the warrior? I think that might help out a bit here.


 * That's be much appreciated dear c: You still have my email? 05:32, July 15, 2016 (UTC)

I do not. If you could shoot that my way, that would be awesome. =D


 * Still not sure if I'm supposed to fix anything... Also gonna be away from my laptop until Thursday morning fyi 19:48, July 18, 2016 (UTC)

Stonetooth (BP) (D) ~ For Approval
I'll blur the stripes more in the next upload. Comments? <span style="">10:15 Sat Jul 16

Define the shading on the legs and tail. 13:15, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

He needs lil' teeth hanging out of his mouth like his other images

his stripes seem to be smudged a little on the other images. 13:59, July 16, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for stripes and shading. Spooky, the tooth is there, but it is very hard to see since there isn't much space for teeth because of where the mouth is placed. Unless I should to change the mouth to make way for the teeth. <span style="">18:34 Sat Jul 16

You need to outline the tooth in black since it's a lineart change. That why nobody can see it. 15:29, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">18:14 Sun Jul 17

Crowfrost (D) ~ For Approval
Comments? <span style="">13:52 Sun Jul 17

Blur the white, and lighten the shading on the white, as it's looking gray. 14:41, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink too 17:53, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the meeting places of the black and white --  18:59, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Also lighten the "white" markings to look white. Right now their a grey-cream color from what it looks like to me. Also smudge the white markings a lot as well as the ear pink. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 20:10, July 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:09 Sun Jul 17