Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 30

Reedfeather- Approved
My second tabby. Comments?-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:01, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. I like the type of tabby stripes that you used. --Rainwhisker 09 23:02, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Love it! I don't see anything right now. Keep it going! --Honeyrose34 23:05, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes on his hind paw that's closest to us should probably be blurred a little more. But this is great!--Nightfall101 23:21, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for all the nice comments. As for the stripes on the hind leg, it's the way their blurred that makes it look unblurred. They're so small that blurring them more dosent make a difference.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:31, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

I think this is ready. Comments before approval? -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦Contribs 17:39, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a lot more shading. On the head and neck area especially. -- Bramble -san  03:39, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Should I darken the shading in those areas?-- Ashshadow My Clan 15:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the highlight some. Is it better?-- Ashshadow My Clan 01:54, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really see the shading, add more.-- Darkhallows 11:15, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?-- Ashshadow My Clan 20:11, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Either darken the shading, or add a couple of highlights. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:53, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the highlights some more. Better?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:56, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add a highlight on the muzzle if there's not one already, it'll make the neck shading seem darker, and give it a good effect. Then it shuold be ready. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:03, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

When you say on the muzzle do you mean the whole muzzle or part of it?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:06, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, the whole muzzle. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 20:38, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded For some reason I don't think this is what you ment. Better?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:58, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, it is what I meant. :P But I forgot to add that you should also add another on the head, but make sure that the eye color doesn't get too light. Also, when you add the highlights, use the brush that is thicker in the middle and thinner like spikes on the outside, not the full brush. (If that made any sense...) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:25, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:38, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The highlight on the face looks spiky. Try blurring it some--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:40, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oops is this better?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:53, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Add some shading on the front leg (on the left, the one closest to us), and it should be ready. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:10, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reloaded Added the shading.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:32, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:33, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approving. Tinsel claw  21:57, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Minnowtail(w)-Approved
The book said she was a dark gray she-cat...but I'm working on the dark gray and white one now and I'll upload it soon... so any comments,criticism?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 17:36, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Really nice!!! Maybe blur teh ear a little more. Hidden -jimgle ♪  17:38, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like some of the lineart of the eye is missing. Just fix that, as well as what Hiddensun said, and this should be good. Great job! -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:52, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 21:19, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be my opinion, but I don't think we need the grey and white version. She has only been mentioned as grey in her warrior rank. If we later see her as grey and white in following books then we'll need an alternate version, but as it stands now, I don't think we do. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Are her eyes blue or amber? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC) ]

I'd guess probably amber...REUPOADed-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 18:45, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:24, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approving. Tinsel claw  21:57, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Night of No Stars (CG) Approved
Okay, here she is again. And it's okay Icethroat, I understand--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:08, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. *sighs in relief* Okay, for the image: maybe run the dodge tool over the ear pink a couple of times, and the mud streaks, make them a darker brown, and thicken the streak on the head just a little bit. Otherwise, awesome, and thanks again. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:13, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I darkened the mud streaks, lightened the ear pink, and thickened the mud streak on her head. Better?--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:32, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Now the ear pink is too light. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - The mud streaks look awesome! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:16, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I ran the burn tool over the ear pink some. Better? And thanks Mossy!--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:40, December 6, 2009 (UTC)


 * sigh* you can have this...but I reserved it first...about a week ago...-- ♥Sha dow edh eart♥  ♥Meow♥ ♥Prey♥  00:17, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Shadow, I checked the history. Both Ice and me did. Nightfall had her first. You must have missed it when you added it in as your own. -- Tinsel claw  02:01, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Shadow! Please don't be sad!--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:05, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Approving. Tinsel claw  21:57, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Echosong - Approved
I'm working on getting all SkyClan cats available done. How is Echosong? -- Tinsel claw  01:50, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

It's a nice picture, but I've never liked that style of tabby stripes. I'm not saying you have to change them, I'm just saying that's my opinion. Other than that, there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with it. The shading and highlights are very nice--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:02, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Wonderful job on Echosong!Good job on shading and highlights.I like her tabby stripes --Firepelt 02:15, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Thanks Fire. Sorry about the stripes, Nightfall; they're the way I've always done them, and I can't change my style now. -- Tinsel claw  02:17, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I know, I really wasn't trying to critisize it. Just my opinion=) But yes, her shading and highlights are awsome! But I would darken her eye color just a little bit--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:20, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Done. -- Tinsel claw  02:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Looks awsome. And I love the rudolph cat!--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Wonderful job, Bramble. I don't see anything else. . . but I'm just an apprentice (who isn't on the template). It looks amazing!-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:35, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 06:46, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

For some odd reason I see a light blue background. Is it just me or the computer? :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

It's transparent, I assure you. -- Tinsel claw  19:02, December 6, 2009

Okay, stupid computer of mine. Anyways ,back to what Sandy sais. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:20, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

didn't sparrowsong reserve her??-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:37, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

There is no such thing as ‘reserved’. The term is current project. It exceeded two weeks and expired, and so I decided to do her. Approving. Tinsel claw  21:57, December 7, 2009 (UTC)