Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Harestar (L) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to fix shading.

02:06, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

This doesn't have a reservation.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:44, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

Added it^ this is what i get for staying up til 5am.

02:46, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

The tail's shading doesn't seem to match the light source, but that miiight just be me. Also, Potato, I'm sure Patch was gonna get to putting a reservation down. I've been known to forget adding/removing tweak reservations myself since they're also listed on the tweak nomination page. Patch is a SW of PCA, and I'm sure she would've gotten around to putting one up - your comment feels like you're overstepping a bit. ^^; —

Please smooth out the edges of the tail shading and haunch shading as well. :) 03:16, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

Songbird (Q) - Redone
hello. ​​​​

Reuploaded. David found leaking shading. ​​​​

Could you smooth out the edges of the shading on the cheek as well? :) 21:50, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I found what was causing that roughness and should have eliminated it. ​​​

Define the shading pretty much everywhere except the face.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:36, December 16, 2018 (UTC)​

I'd like to ask for a second opinion on this, as if I define it any further, I'm afraid it's going to (again) overtake the entire image. ​​​

I think it looks good imo 22:39, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

Forget shading, there's waste outside the chest (getting shot in 3, 2 1..). Potato Flakin (talk) 22:41, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

There's no waste on this image. I use a clipping mask, meaning everything is synced to the bottom layer (which is the base) and it does not show waste. ​​

Desaturate the earpink a smidge, it's darker than the StarClan.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:02, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

No, it's not? I have the .psd files for both and just did the ear pink on both images a few hours ago. ​

Songbird (Star) - Redone
all colors are the same, the queen just has a butt-ton more shading than this one does. ​

Re-uploaded. OKAY they should be a little better synced with stripes and whatnot. ​

The shading appears to be leaking slightly away from the lineart on the > side face down near the shoulder, and I think mayyyybe the stripe going across the elbow on the < leg would be a smidge thicker, as compared to the queen c: 22:26, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hm. ​

Idk if it’s just me or the perspective of the blank, but I feel like the stripes on the flank here are larger than the rest of the stripes when they are uniform on the queen. 22:45, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's just the perspective. I know if I shrink said stripes, there's going to be a lot of empty space on this image, since I can't just add extra stripes. Probably partially my fault for only using larger stripes...lol. I'm not 100% sure what should be done. ​

Cloudpelt (Ki) - Redone
Thanks I hate it. OA is Trolly. 06:33, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading, I really can't see it. ​

Re-uploaded: Hopefully this is better... I could not get the shading quite right. 06:41, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Ivypool (A) ~ Redone
OA was Mistystar139. Tweaked by Shelly and Fox. Redone to make silver with white splotches. All colors from the original apprentice, and I did my best to match the original stripe placement. 19:29, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

GAHH I forgot the white paws and such I'll fix that in a sec!! 19:31, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Think I got all of them 19:41, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

maybe lighten up the silver? it looks more regular grey rn 19:44, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 19:47, December 17, 2018 (UTC)