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Cloud (Storm) (Alt. E)- For Approval
Comments? I might need to smooth out the shading, I'll do that tomorrow. 02:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

there's a bit of waste behind the head

next to the ear too actually. also there appears to be shading leaking around the haunch/underbelly area.

The shading should be smoothed too and it wouldn't hurt tk add a tad more depth.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

define light more on the front paws please. --

06:39, 4/17/2019

Reuploaded  23:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the front leg. smooth out the shading on the haunch and add depth everywhere

can you also define the shading on the ear? 02:40 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded  21:42, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

smudge the pelt into the earpink and the shading is still really blotchy. Also, most of the shading suggests that the light is coming from over the back, but the face and the placement of the light in the eye suggests that it's coming from the front 06:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste next to the ear

Reuploaded tried with the shading depth, how does this look? 21:38, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, rump and the space between the belly and tail I think. JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded should be gone now! 02:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading --

16:02, 4/20/2019

Reuploaded how is dis, Silver? 17:02, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste by the tail, legs and head! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  01:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste-free! 02:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. 03:19, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded how's this? 03:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it on the legs and flank, and define it on the face? 13:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice also defined the tail's light. There is already shading on the face, it's below the ear closest to us. 15:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed more, pretty much everywhere, save for the head. There appears to be shading leaking on the tail, belly, and limbs. Can you also define the shading on the one paw furthest from us and inside the ear?

I'll work on this soon. Who said that, btw? 22:55, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Patch said it, the power of history logs! 00:33, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and smooth the shading you erased on the tail and front paws? Every time you erase shading, you're gonna want to smooth it out. ^^ 12:50, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded green shading is sometimes no but today is yes 23:14, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Very nice! 19:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but the light source is contradictory. The back/legs/most of it shows it coming like so, but the facial shading is on the wrong side. Whipped up an example of what I meant - green is where there should be no shading/light, blue is what should be shaded given the source, red is just the front legs which need their shading smoothed since it's too sharp from the last erasure, and the purple is the belly shading, which is leaking away from the lineart.

Reuploaded oh no what I have I done to this shading  00:07, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the belly is still leaking away from the lineart. Also, the added shading on the face and ears is much lighter than the rest and could stand to be darkened^^ Additionally, there's leaking shading on the bottom side of the tail, a new sharp erasure mark, and the light on the front legs could be defined with a smoother transition - it did solve the erasure mark issue, but was over blurred and removed the light that was present.

Frondwhisker (W) - For Approval
Shading looks horrendous but I guess we'll see. The colors are taken from the apprentice.

19:42, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the back foot. Also smooth out the shading a little? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:33, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. 22:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:31, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice stripes seem thicker, could you thicken them?  Ellie  life is an illusion 00:35, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:45, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the facial shading some? 02:42 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded

03:12, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the pale parts rougher and make the pale marks over her eyes more pointy? Her tail also needs some pale. She needs some more stripes on the leg closest to us and on her chest, to match what i had on the kit. Could you maybe make the texture rougher too? it looks a bit too soft (i used the pencil tool to make it) the stripes on the face could be rougher too. the stripes on the forehead are also more like a half circle on the bottom, then two other halves of a circle on the edges. I have no idea if that makes sense so if you need me to explain further or a redline for that let me know. 03:50, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you? It'd be easier for me that way.

03:59, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

sort of like half a circle with an "M" she also needs three little dots below her eyes. here's her kit with just the stripes, as a reference for her leg and face stripes, if that helps. 04:15, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

23:34, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The texture is very pencil-ey and hard edged. Could you soften it?

Reuploaded

21:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the hind leg? And I think the black on her nose should be expanded to touch the lines of her nose if I'm not mistaken. JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  12:41, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:38, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the haunch to curve along the back, and shade the little triangle/back leg, as it'd more than likely be in shadow.

Better?

20:19, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if this is needed but could you make the texture a bit more subtle? Just reduce the opacity by a tad. 15:51, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

The texture currently matches the kit & apprentice, not sure if it needs to be changed in that regard.

18:19, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the pale tail-tip and maybe add some shading in ---> ear? 20:14, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Better? 02:40, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Troutclaw (E) - For Approval
I wanted a challenge! .. and anime hair. im only in it for thE HAIR. I referenced and colorpicked the star. i dont think i matched the stripes very great tho?? but if you have suggesstions on that please do ill probably fiddle with those tomorrow. i sure got that challenge. i think i can have this and flutterkit bc this is a redo? Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 02:07, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! The stripes appear a tad sharper/rugged on the star. Maybe try using a very small eraser and stroke horizontally on the edges? 12:17, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 12:39, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, will re-up soon as I can. I've finally almost got the stripes to a point I like them more. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:52, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

reups i think this should match a bit nicer if I did it right. also sorry for delay next reups will be faster <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:41, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Remove the > most stripe on both front paws, the star/former set images show they never went that far down. The stripes are generally sharper in style and more disorderly on the star, as well.

Dawncloud (E) ~ For Approval
redid this, because I could not make heads or tails of how to even begin tweaking it  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:38, 4/18/2019> ​

CBA?

Sorry to break CBA, could you actually expand the shading on the haunch? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:06, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm gonna reupload this later but will do. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <01:08, 4/21/2019> ​

Just gonna nudge to see if you're still working, Star? ​

unfortunately I am busy and will not be back at my computer until Saturday. sorry. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <18:23, 4/24/2019> ​

Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Reuploaded. I like the eye color of the apprentice pic more oof :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  13:19, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

What are the lighter blotches on her? Are those highlights? If so, tone them down (on the opacity bar). Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The pupils appear to be inconsistent in color- one eye has a darker black than the other. Shading is still leaking in some places. Don't worry! I struggle with that as well. Fill those blank areas with shading- I can provide a redline if you want. Smooth out the shading everywhere- just smooth out the edges with the blur or smudge tool, Gaussian Blur makes shading leak away, only use it if you want a really good shading gradient. You have unfilled pixels on > this side of the tail. Sorry for the wall of text! You're doing good so far! 22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Potato! <3 And thank you so much for the redline if you can provide!!! I feel so foolish… <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Here. Red= fill in/add shading. Blue= Remove shading to fit your light source. Green=Waste. Delete that. Yellow= missing/light pixels. Magenta= blur/smudge and tone down the highlights. Hope this helps! (if I mess up on the source sorry if I do). 22:31, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Aww thank you Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  03:40, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm it doesn't appear you did what I said. Did you reupload the right file? The only difference I see is that the highlight blotches are set to a higher opacity.. I meant to lower them, then blur/smudge. If you need any more help, let me know! 03:51, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof... maybe it's the .mpd file, I guess? :P Anyway :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

What is that on her belly? If that's shading depth you need to lighten it and blur/smudge it. Lighten the highlight spots on her legs more and then blur/smudge them. Smooth out the shading and make >> this pupil darker to match <<this pupil. Let me know if you need to elaborate! 13:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Havenpelt (Q) - For Approval
Honestly I'm not really happy with this. Tinystream (talk) 23:05, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing the image? Could reup it? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:47, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Darken shading and define the light <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:48, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reup I may have to redo the white. Tinystream (talk) 01:28, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the light on the forepaws, they're looking quite grey at the moment

Judging by her apprentice, the eyes need to be a darker green. These look pale teal tbh. 02:44, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Her eyes are green? I though they were blue... Either way, I'm not sure if I can change it since I colorpicked it from the apprentice.. Tinystream (talk) 21:02, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like the apprentice to me imo Malina457 (talk) 00:56, April 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

Eyes look fine and sometimes Wikia washes out blue/green colours. 11:42 Tue Apr 23 2019

Could you smooth out the transitions between the white and black? And add some, faint, shading to the front paws. There at least be some. 12:48, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the white on the belly white? I can't even see it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:06, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reup There was already shading on the front paws so I just defined it, also made some other shading fixes. I'm also not sure how to fix the belly white, since it's below both shading layers? Tinystream (talk) 22:50, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Oh and also, I won't be here for the weekend. Tinystream (talk) 22:57, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Hm okay sorry to break but given matching the app comes into play I don't believe there should be be any white on the < side of the face, nor going onto the shoulder of the < front leg. The neck on this blank is hidden, so it wouldn't wrap around like that (and hadn't in the original warrior, which holds the pattern still). I also can't really see the shading on the tail tip, and the depth could be defined on the white chest

Rain (Alt.E) ~ CBA
I have no idea of the light source so if I need to fix it, please be specific of where exactly to adjust/add shading.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, there shouldn't be any shading on the back. See Cloud (my art). She has a similar source to this. 02:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Actually from the way it seems, there shohld be back shading as it looks as though its coming from the --> <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:09, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Yes it's meant to be coming from top -> so I think a little bit of back shading is needed.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:26, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

I'd still recede it some on the back. Some is needed, but I don't think that much is. Also, shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart on the belly and the front legs could use light definition

Reupload<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  04:20, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe add some more shading on the shoulder? <--- portion of it. 12:46, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reupload<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:35, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Fringewhisker (W) - CBA
so. tortoiseshells. 20:45, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Uh from what her page says she's spose to be white with brown spltoches? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:57, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

It matches the apprentice Mink, except for the face patch, please recede it to the mid nose, its white there, good job though! Malina457 (talk) 21:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

On the loner and apprentice the pattern is much less smudged than what you have. 21:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The face placement actually looks alright in my opinion, but maybe move the white on the cheek up a little bit? Sorry if this is a repeat comment 21:52 Sun Apr 21 2019

Ok maybe I was seeing an old version?? Cause now it looks fine, my apologies XD Malina457 (talk) 22:06, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

Re-Uploaded! I've been trying for a bit now but if it still doesn't match, I'll work on it tommorow! 22:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the body shading just a tad? so cute!! <span style="">01:04 Mon Apr 22

There are three shades on brown on the image. You've got two of them that's darker and lighter, and another that's more grayish. There's supposed to be some white flecks on ---> portion of the face. I don't know if Jayce already offered you, but would you like one of the files? I did her kit a while back, and trust me, it really helped. ^^ 03:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I honestly have not had the time to offer the file, but I'm always willing to send one to someone if they need it. (provided I remember to do so lmao) ​​​​

Re-Uploaded! I think this is better? If it's not the file might be helpful ;w;  19:24, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure on this, but does this have texture, or is that textured shading? Also, there should be white "flecks" scattered throughout the pelt. ​​

Re-Uploaded! And it's textured shading with a tiny bit of texture 12:45, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Please remove the texture, as the other images don't have it. While texture is always artist's choice, if the other images in the set don't have it, you aren't allowed to add it to whichever image you're doing.

Re-Uploaded! I got rid of my texture layer, but if the shading is too much, I can smooth it out! 18:58, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more white to ---> front paw? The brown is supposed to be only covering the right side of it. 12:44, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 01:47, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA ? `

Conefoot (W) ~ For Approval
Color picked from the apprentice! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  17:06, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

The patches need to be sharper, per the apprentice image. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm just from the files, since the earpink is darker because of shading coverage on the app; the color should be #i875e5d beneath everything, which should be just a touch lighter than this. Also, I believe there's some shading leaking away from the lineart on both back feet.

Can you smooth out the shading on the flank/side? There looks to be a sharp line through it. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  21:34, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

could you also smooth out the tail shading a bit? <span style="">19:42 Tue Apr 23

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  21:32, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

You have waste outside the tail and < these whiskers. 22:12, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Apprentice does have a little gray on the top of the head, and the gray on the back should go lower to have only just the belly as white. The gray additionally doesn't stretch all the way up the neck, leading to the head - it should cut off before the shoulderblade.

Reuploaded! Like that? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  00:00, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the gray- it's really hard-edged and does not match the apprentice (was this rude? sorry if it was). 00:02, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:18, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Mmkay.. the gray is beginning to turn a tad yellow. Can you fix that? Also, I think you oversmudged the gray tad, so perhaps sharpen the edges of it? Sorry for being so nitpicky.. ;) 00:32, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

I also feel like the gray is overblurred. 12:30, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! This is the bane of my existence -Shadow   hOnK :o)  01:35, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

The gray on the face is a little overblurred still.

Per previous comment, the gray should not stretch all the way to the neck, and it still does.

Actually, all of the gray seems lighter in shade and overblurred, not just the face. 22:04, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  15:42, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

If you end up needing the apprentice file let me know, still do have that around. It's getting closer, however a few small things still: shrink the eyepatch and forehead gray slightly, just a bit too large. Define the light/shading differences on the front legs, as it looks a bit blotchy, and - remove the gray on the visible shoulder (the round bit). The front legs were never meant to have gray, even though it's not visible persay on the app, the master pattern still falls to me (resembling a cat I know). But, you've done a great job with it :3

Baykit (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay, my son is done. im probably gonna have to either darken or light the face/booty shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:39, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Hm, this looks more ginger then golden imo. maybe make the base a bit more yellow. and smooth the shading on the hind leg and tail. 10:30, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you expand then lighten the shading everywhere? 11:21, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

I think its fine the colors that is, as I used Star Flower's colors as an example (color picked from her and all) and she's a golden tabby. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:38, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

I have to agree with Ari, I wonder if it's the shading that's doing it... She seems a bit more orange than golden. Also, smooth out the shading everywhere, lighten it a bit on the neck, and don't forget to expand it on the tail. ​​​

Hm.. I'll fiddle with it and see if I can fix that then. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:47, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, Max helped with a redline and I used an image as well for the new stripes. I tried to fix the back stripes but they still seemed to straight or something. I expanded the tail shading and smoothed all the shading. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:48, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you.. um.. make the stripes less blocky? Or make them look more like stripes? I can't tell where they even are on Baykit's pelt, if they're the darker or lighter part of the pelt. 22:02, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Those do look like stripes, its a classic tabby design. I used a life image and a friend's redline for it, I don't see where the base part and stripes can be confused imo. Stripes are always normally the darker ones unless your seeing a smoke tabby. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:44, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

i think it looks fine– it looks like a marbled tabby 23:15, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the hutch shading a bit more? I can't quite tell the difference between the dark marbling and the shading, but could just be my screen! 03:11, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:26, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Curlfeather (Q) - CBA
Couldn't find any other chararts on her page so did whatever. 01:36, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

warrior and kit are here, please match them. Since I'm still around and the OA of the warrior, I'd like to keep the set the style it currently has. ​​​​

Reuploaded - Fixed everything. Copied every colour and every layer percentage of the warrior. Hopefully this looks good! 03:11, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading and add depth to it as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:00, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you make the texture on the main body curve more along the flank so that it doesnt look as flat? 11:21, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source, the face and tail suggest -> whilst the body looks other wise. Removing the shading from the back would probably fix the issue 11:38 Tue Apr 23 2019

Can you define the pupils? -- 22:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to keep as close as possible to the OA's, but put in the changes requested. 23:20, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you make it so that the texture flows naturally on the main body? criss crossing looks unnatural and doesn't match the other images

Reuploaded - Realised the mistake. I forgot to change the secondary texture. 23:30, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:45, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the facial and stomach shading could be smooth and lightened a tad. Compared to the rest its overly dark and doesn't look consistent with the rest. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:51, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  03:08, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Its still pretty dark, the tail and legs seem way lighter. You might work with darkening those bits as I know it can be hard lightening up some areas. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:53, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  11:36, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 22:46, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Pine That Clings to Rock (CG) - CBA
Kit's mine, so I changed the colors and gave him his father's eyes. ​

Needs mud on the fur maybe? Tybaxel (talk) 16:47, April 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Yeah, that I know. I'll add it once I get this shading down; I'm not good with larger blanks and I want to make sure I get that down before I add mud. ​

Might I suggest curving the haunch shading a tad more, and having the paws completely in shadow? Then I think you’d be all good to add the mud :D 17:22 Wed Apr 24 2019

Re-uploaded. ​

CBa?

Spotfur (W) - CBA


i’m assuming i can post this now? i’m very sorry about posting it before, i misinterpreted the rules 😓

Can I just say, I love this lol. Maybe smooth out the haunch shading? Malina457 (talk) 00:29, April 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Can you either define the light or define shading? It all lokks a bit flat throughout for me but it could be my phone screen. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:09, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded the shadows are fine to me i think, theyre on 80% opacity.

I agree that the shading depth could be defined. 14:03, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i've tried to define it as much as i can, shadows are on 90% opacity   18:41, April 26, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA?

Harelight (W) ~ For Approval
my boy. all colors picked from apprentice

08:39, April 25, 2019

Can you smooth the tail shading? It looks like its going against the natural tail form on the top and it throws it off <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:41, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

maybe try expanding the fur texture over the haunch? it looks a bit blank, otherwise it’s super cute! 02:24, April 26, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

maybe smooth the lower haunch shading? Malina457 (talk) 03:38, April 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

There should also be a bit of shading curvingnover the top of the haunch. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:47, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups

11:08, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to repeat earlier comments, but can you please extend the texture more on the tail and hutch maybe? Looks like it's just the white of the blank and not finished. 03:15, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

the apprentice follows like this. --

I agree that it should be extended more, it looks a bit bare. I tried to put light texture on all the unshaded parts on the apprentice. 14:32, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Ah, okay.

17:17, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also still be smoothed and the haunch shading expanded as that's pretty thin. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:52, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

expand the texture a little more onto the right side of the face + the chest? it's hard to see it imo :P 22:36, April 27, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

OST-2.warrior-1 - For Approval
Made from a practice charart I did. So his torn ear will be removed shortly. Just wanted to post it. And I accidently named it wrong, it should be OST not OTS <span style="">16:24 Thu Apr 25

Renamed for ya^^

Reuploaded Thank ya! His torn ear is gone, since I don't know if I can add stuff like that to these lol <span style="">15:22 Fri Apr 26

Could you define the shading on the > ear a little?

Rabbitfur (E) -CBA
tried to at least resemble beebs' style but this is a stark reminder of why i don't do classic tabbies 06:44, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you reduce the white on the chest and muzzle? 14:01, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:57, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:13, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rushtail (E) ~ For Approval
so he has a star, but his page doesn't even say he dies? so i'm not sure if i had to match the star or if i could revamp it as much as i did (oops) but i'll change it to whatever it's supposed to be

My only issue thus far is he looks a tad green, maybe try adjusting the color a tad? Malina457 (talk) 12:05, April 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

The star isn't in use, Su cites are not canon. He doesn't look green. Can you smooth out the shading? 13:00, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

sorry for my lack of knowledge but what are su cites? i’ll fix up the shading when i wake up :)

well he looks greenish to me :/ Malina457 (talk) 21:45, April 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

Eheh Su is kinda a long story.. she was making canon sites and one day Vicky said she wasn't canon. Anyways can you also define the light on the tail? 22:33, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

It does look rather green... and also, the shading on the front leg closest to us should reach further up, to define the leg/shoulder shape

reups i changed the base colour so i hope it looks less green, also blurred the shading but i might mess around with it more since i'm not that happy with it :/

The shading could use a lot of smoothing out so it doesn't look so blotchy. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading one or two percent?

Cloudy Sun (E) - For Approval
Ancient isn't in use, nor is the sharpclaw. The Ancient should have never been in use; they didn't just stop being elders when they moved to their new territories. ​

Could you darken the shading everywhere but the tail?

She looks a bit golden to me

Re-uploaded. Stole Sandstorm's coloring. ​

Could you define the stomach shading a bit, I'm having a hard time seeing it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Snow (CG) ~ For Approval
16:14, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:55, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you soften the texture just a bit and maybe soften that back shading? The texture on the to-be seems to be a bit more softer. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:56, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. the shading is already pretty smooth on the back. 20:14, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Petalfall (Elder) - For Approval
Kept most of the original pattern by Mount Everest, just updated the linework. 18:52, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the ---> ear and the front legs/paws? 19:57, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Added shading to the paws and tweaked the ears. 21:01, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some shading to >> this side of the tail? It looks kinda flat over there. Sorry if your source doesn't call for shading to be there ;) 22:45, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Yeah, there should definitely have been some shading there. 10:43, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a bit if shading on the elbow of the <-- fore leg <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:56, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Dapplenose (E) ~ For Approval
Dunno if I did the pattern justice. 19:53, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the tail? The source there confuses me a bit with some of it on the top. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 20:05, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Mottled dark gray and brown warrior (W) ~ For Approval
Forgot the mottles whoops. Also, dunno if this is can be considered dark gray and brown enough. Tried to find a hue that matched both. And, I also don't know if I should remove the stripes on the body, since he was only described with a tabby head. So many questions 19:53, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light/depth. It seems flat on my phone screen <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:55, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also define the gray and mottles. I can't see mottles and the gray looks more pale brown <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:52, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Tabby part only needs to apply to his head, I think. 22:42, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 00:04, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups basically re did it 19:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing any gray? Maybe try lightening the brown since it seems to be makingnit hard to see any gray at all? That might help. Could you also define the mottles too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:58, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups brightened up the gray a bit. 20:06, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups didn't see the mottled comment >.> 20:11, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Gravelnose (W) - CBA
What the heck, all these new cats have awesome names  21:20, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Can you make the texture on the tail flow in one direction a little more? It looks kind of criss-crossy. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:46, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reup aw, thank you so much! 22:01, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Ah, I love it when sets have matching tints. CBA?

Dark Gray-and-Brown Warrior (W) ~ For Approval
Mostly just an excuse to reuse Deerfoot's pattern. Comments? 23:01, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the tip of the shoulder patch into the gray more? If you're confused I can provide a redline. 23:10, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I understood what you meant. 23:21, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth and smooth the edges of it? Could you also add light to the chest. Even with this skurce there would still be light on the chest and legs <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:23, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smudge or blur the patches a bit? they look hard edged Malina457 (talk) 19:42, April 27, 2019 (UTC)malina

Smooth the haunch shading a touch?

Quick Water (Star) ~ CBA


Can you define the depth? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:24, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

CBA?

BP gray kit ~ For Approval


Can you define the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:23, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Deerleap (E) ~ For Approval
matched the star

Define the shading on the gray. 13:11, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Can you expand the haunch and tail shading just a bit? Its still a little hard to see it there. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:00, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Hollyflower (E) ~ For Approval
mega hollyflower

09:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading, and define it on the white? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:00, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also extend the white on the tail (or at least one part of it) to reach the end of the tail? 20:07, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw (A) - For Approval
baby boy 22:42 Sat Apr 27 2019

Can you smooth the chest and bellt shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:46, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:54 Sat Apr 27 2019

Thank you for taking over! Smooth out the tail shading? 23:03, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Based on where the head and paw shading is i think the tail shading should be on the other side?

Some waste by the chin. The shading could be smoothed everywhere tbh

reuploaded i've used this source previously (here) 02:13 Sun Apr 28 2019

I think the source is fine as from the looks of it, its coming from above <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:03, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Dark Brown Kit ~ For Approval
I hope I named this right... -Shadow  hOnK :o)  22:53, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and smooth out the shading. I think the name is correct but with these guys it doesn't matter until after the image is approved. 23:01, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Tabby WindClan Warrior (W)- For Approval
Comments? Now presenting the Daisy/Sandstorm clone with lovely pointed tabby stripes. 23:06, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

This might be personal preference (since I normally try realism with tabbies lol) but maybe add a couple more stripes to the legs? If not that's all good. I think some depth could be added to the shading tho <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:24, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

I forgot one thing, normally when it comes too pointed tabbies they also have stripes on their faces so maybe add some there too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:28, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oh it's fine Mink. There are stripes on the face. Did you look closely? 23:28, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

I can't see them at all <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:30, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

I see them, but they could stand to be defined. Also, you've got waste along the right ear. Besides that, could you smoothen out the eye depth? 23:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Fuzzypelt (E) - For Approval
the earpink looks so much brighter in gimp ugh! <span style="">23:08 Sat Apr 27

Cinderheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Sorry for uploading it the last time, I keep forgetting about the one "new" image rule. All colors taken from her ultimate guide pic of course - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:12, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

She's so blue (get the song reference?). Can you define the eye depth just a tad? 23:15, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

i have to ask but what is this alt even for? shes a dark grey tabby like her desc states. 23:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Alt for The Ultimate Guide. 23:22, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

thats what i meant. shes dark grey tabby there. it doesnt go against anything. 23:25, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Last I knew on the alt's discussed for her she wasn't suppose to get an alt coz she was shown as a short hair ans the artists choice gave her longhair. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:25, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

fur length alone hasnt been a valid thing unless theres some other mistake, so i may have to lean towards declining it unfortunatwly. its also not in her mistakes section. 23:27, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

We voted on having one this, even just for the fur length and slightly differing colors. It'd have to go through the forum to revoke that decision since that consensus still stands for now, so for now it's valid until/if that goes through

If it's fur length why would it get an alt? Why not just tweak the other images to be short hair if that's the issue? As from what i see of the image, there isn't really that much of a difference color wise. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:33, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

not really since it goes againstthe requirements for an image alt to be valid anyway. this shoukdve been declined jsut based off that alone. that and she isnt named for it either. 23:34, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

The vote passed though. You'd have to bring it up again if you don't agree it's valid.

Do I still work on this then, or do I wait? I assume I'd have to wait for the results of the voting if it happens. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:52, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

The vote passed. So technically it's valid unless someone brings it up on the vote again and it's deemed not valid there.

but if its againat the actual rules of the project itself, it shouldnt be here regardless, even with a vote. jose, its up to you if you want to continue it or not. its not a slight against you, just the fact this image shouldnt actually be considered valid. 02:10, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I meant if there was going to be a new voting. Also I completely understand, no worries. If this image shouldn't be valid in the first place then I don't see the point in continuing with it. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:23, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Some argued that it wasn't valid, back when it was voted on, and the majority that timesaid it was valid. To reverse that we do need to bring it back up again and have a trail, because wiki-wide policy is of following consensus. The vote had been split because some people disagreed, but that is up to the voters, as everything 'round is; we can't auto-decline with a vote that says otherwise still in place. If it's truly invalid, the next vote would pass easily enough.

isnt the alt for the fact that shes not dappled? but regardless, can you define the shading on the chest? 02:37, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

And just saying, but there's no rule in the guidelines saying that you can't have an alt based on fur length.

can you darken the shading, the aqua colored shading throws it off a lil <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:05, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (E) ~ For Approval
Noticed the need to be a bit lighter, will fix that next upload. 23:48, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading depth `

Gorseclaw (RC) (W) - For Approval
Can't believe I'm a warrior... did my best to match the apprentice without the file and once again will probably fiddle with the shading (I swear it always looks better in SAI). Juniperbriar (talk) 00:25, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. maybe smooth and lighten the shading some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:06, April 28, 2019 (UTC)