Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Lightningpelt- For approval
A minor character. Comments? Hawkfire Talk! 00:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

The white streak on her back would probably be on the lineart, rather than on the side of the pelt like it is now. Otherwise, great job, Hawkfire! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:26, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Icethroat, and also make the ear pink more of a fine triangular shape, and less of a bright pink color. -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦ Contribs 01:49, November 9, 2009 (UTC) Awesome! Um I don't really see anything *goes closer* Nope &#91;&#91;User:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;background:silver; color:goldenrod;&quot;&gt;&#39;&#39;&#39;Icestorm&#39;&#39;&#39;&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;sup&gt;&#91;&#91;User Talk:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;color:blue;&quot;&gt;How&#39;s the prey running?&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;/sup&gt; 02:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Make sure you make it slightly smaller, as we probably wouldn't be able to see it all. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:04, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the streak on the back, and worked on her stripes and ear pink. Hawkfire Talk! 19:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

nice work. but now I can hardley see the streak. maybe make it a bit bigger and longer. Darkmoon25

Your tabby stripes seem to be blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:56, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hawkfire Talk! 23:11, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok the image still looks good. but I can hardly see the ear pink and the streak looks more like a patch now then a streak. But good job Darkmoon25

This hasn't been updated in awhile. Please update soon.-- Darkhallows 11:04, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hawkey Rawr! LOL 19:36, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart around the neck area, and the lineart on the back is a bit too thin. Also, the ear pink is touching the bottom of the ear when it should be a fine triangular shape, kept inside the ear lineart. Fix these things, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦Contribs 13:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a week; please work on it or it will be declined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry about that! Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 21:46, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - The tabby stripes aren't as blurred on the shoulder as they are on the haunch. Streak looks great though. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:58, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

The upload log isnt working for me. I will try to update soon. Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:56, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Mist where Sunlight Shimmers - For Approval
well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it?? *santa pool*  07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --Rainwhisker 09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --  Icy -chan  20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  pool*  07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.-- Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also Sandy   Talk   16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --  Icy -chan  21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better?? *Ivy pool*  06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look right, make it look like this. Also, maybe make the end of the tail a little bit darker than the rest of the tail (just use the burn tool a couple of times), so that it shows the shading more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *angel's  bells*  06:38, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks need to be a little lighter. Other than that, great job! -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 12:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded i think it's strange...-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:24, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... the mud streaks look too green still and need to be slightly thinner I think. I'd personally use a size 5 brush and blur well. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:44, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

reploadedi started it all over... -- *Ivy jingle jingle!!* 07:40, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hareflight- For Approval
Here's Hareflight. Her description looked easy so I took a go at it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:49, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job, Hawkey. Just blur the shading and highlights a bit so that they don't look so messy, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:31, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the color a little bit more natural, right now it looks dul--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:35, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened color, and blurred shading and ighlights to the best of my ability. THe upload log works again! :D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 23:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the tips of it's paws, the fur gets lighter. Fix that unless it's part of the description of him. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - Maybe add some shading around the belly/middle section? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:05, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a while. Please work on it soon or it will have to be declined. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 15:37, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The upload log isnt working for me. I will try to update soon. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:56, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Swiftstar (L)-For Approval
Is he okay? Warriors808 22:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't bad but you need to blur the shading and highlights. you might also want to add some shading to his left side.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:08, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Are you even online? Great for your first try! Just do what Ashy said and he'll be amazing! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:22, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Also, he needs ear pink --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The space right between his hind leg and his right fore-arm is white, it needs to be gray--Nightfall101 06:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his leg, it looks. . . smudged. And yes, add ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched for 7 days. Please work on it soon--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:08, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Night, Black hasn't been on because she was on vacation. She went to the cape. Anyways she's online right now so she'll upload it because she already had it done but it wasn't uploaded. Anyways Black, for the image maybe blur the earpink some more and the lineart on the leg looks....blurred. Fill that in black with the bucket tool and I think he'll be ready. Nice job for your first Charart. Oh and Night she works on these but she doesn't have time to upload them. She is always busy. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:32, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't know--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Gone on vacation or not, Icestorm, Nightfall was right to say something; if you're not going to be able to update the image for a while, either leave a message saying so, or withdraw the image but leave it reserved so you can put it up when you get back. Image-wise, make the nose color a light gray instead of a pinkish color, don't have the ear pink filling up the entire ear, just in the middle of the ear, and make the ear pink more like the color of Smoketalon or Graymist's ear.

Also, the shading still needs blurred a lot more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. She didn't know. She is only a newcomer. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blacktail called me and I told her what happened and she said she is re-doing this. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of... strange. Make it smaller, and less inward. Blur it a bit as well. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. It looks too bright to me.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 08:57, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I'll TRY to fix it. I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BAD!at Chararts :( Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 22:14, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

DON'T decline this. I am working on it with the help of Icestorm and Minnowclaw. Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 13:06, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Just for fun when I was re-doing Swiftstar I made him into a long haired cat. Is that okay? Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 00:51, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

well, Swiftstar is a WindClan cat so I personally think it better if he were shorthaired. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:50, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

try lighting up the shades a bit it really works

It's beautiful, I just love what you did with the eyes. I think the ear pink need to be blurred though. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 04:19, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) - For Approval
My second charart. Comments? --  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is incredible! Just two things, first of all I think I can see a gray speck on his belly. And then (This might just be me being picky) but the face looks a little to dark. Maybe lighten up on the shading there?--Nightfall101 20:59, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Holly!!! I agree with Night that the face is kinda too dark. And maybe blur a little the shading and the pink in the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

i love it! although, i agree also, the face is a bit too dark and shade the ear. Otherwise, its fantastic! -- ♥Shine star♥  23:31, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks =). Better now?  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is looking good. But there are two spots where the shading doesn't connect with the lineart. Right on his butt, (yeah, I said it =]) And the bottom of his front right paw.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:07, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart looks as if it is blurred. Blur the fur, and lighten up a bit, especially on the paws. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The tail looks really dark. But I'm picky :)--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid this one, I hope it looks better now ^^  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is amazing! Just darken the ear pink a tad. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 16:13, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Nightwing (W)-For Approval
My second Charart! Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job!!! Maybe blur the ear more and either make the shading darker or the pelt lighter. Hidden -jimgle ♪  00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

It's AWESOME Icy, but blur the ear pink a little and maybe a couple shades lighter. Otherwise, It lookes great!!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:07, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be a bit smaller. It takes up the whole ear. Great job, my apprentice! :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:11, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Um I am trying to full it up to a lighter black but it fills the line-art to! Help! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:14, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still think the earpink is still too big. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

If you use pixlr.com you can either use burn tool to make darker or doge too to make lighter parts. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:06, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

And to blur the ear pink. It's too bright, run the burn tool over it a bit.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 20:16, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! But try making the ear pink more of a purplish-color. Like Fuzzypelt And maybe make it's postion a little higher--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Workin on it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:48, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is she ready for approval? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:08, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. I think she'll be ready after that-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred earpink. Better? Is she resady for approval? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:15, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Stop asking. It will be approved when it's ready. Add some shading on the top of the head and more on the chest. There is a dark patch on the haunch among the shading; get rid of that. also blur the shading as much as you possibly can. -- Tinsel claw  01:54, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I am sooooooooooooooooo sorry. And how do I get rid of it? (Please don't laugh) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 03:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Grr. Pixlr is getting on my nerves. Well I blurred the shading as much as I could. And I tried to get rid of the dark thing on her hind leg but it wouldn't leave! Help! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:56, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

How about erasing it and recoulouring it? Just a suggestion. Maplefern 00:09, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I don' know. I'll only do it if Warriors,Senior Warriors,Sandy or Bramble tells me to. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:36, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Icestorm, everyone's opinions and suggestions are valued, and plus, Maplefern's right, you could try erasing it, or using the pencil tool at size square one and coloring it white instead of erasing it, and then coloring it back in again. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:04, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I just wasn't sure. Working on it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 12:56, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect Icey! X3 Maybe just lighten it an insy winsy bit otherwise PERFECT! --Echopaw 00:37, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Okay I re-did this. Any more comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:12, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good, but the ear pink needs to be smaller, and the shading could be blurred a little more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:08, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I am going to school right now so I will work on this when I come back. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 12:55, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the chest looks....different. Maplefern 22:51, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

How? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas!

It kind of looks like a thin line. Maplefern 00:02, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know what you mean. I think your saying the lineart is a thin line. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:11, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

If i was in charge of PCA i would approve! really good job!--Echopaw 00:26, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, never mind. Maplefern 12:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I have a few things: The ear pink is too big: Nightwing is a black cat and the ear pink is not normally even visible. For the purpose of charart we do add ear pink but it needs to be smaller than that of a coloured cat. Look at as an example. Also, the shading is too thin and is blotchy/missing in places. Thicken it and blend it using the blur tool. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 12:25, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Nettlepaw (a) For approval
My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? -- ♥Shine star♥  19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar ♥Shine ]] star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA) -- for Approval
It may not be nessacary, but I made an image of Hollyleaf as a medicine cat apprentice. It is my first and I'd like to learn as much as possible. Maplefern 13:50, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I'd say to blur the highlights around the edges, fill in that white spot on her belly, add ear pink, and to do the eye according to this tutorial. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 15:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Maplefern 15:47, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I can just see a few things: The Lineart on the chest seems to be blurred and the shadding isn't blurred enough (and needs to be lighter) ;). Something happened to the lineart on the hindleg too, I think. Otherwise it looks great for you first Charart =). --  Holly... leaf or berry?

Reuploaded Maplefern 16:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Your ear pink is round and more closer to the begining of her ear (tip). And make it a lighter color. It's too bright right now. Nice job for your 1st!! And by the way, on your title, you don't need to menton it's your 1st. Just say the cat, what position it's in, and that it's up for approval. I fixed it for u. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded Is it better? Maplefern 16:21, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, like her kit version. Add some shading to the tail, and make all of the shading just a little bit darker. But this image isn't really necessary right now, as it says up at the top in the purple box that says "important". Can you find any other cat this could be? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I can't. Can you? Maplefern 22:51, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maplefern 23:35, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

What could I improve on? --Maplefern 00:45, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and shading still need to be fixed as I said above. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:34, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Maplefern 11:41, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

I tried. Anything else? Maplefern 12:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Coloring is great and all, but last time I checked, Hollyleaf was a short-haired cat. What about that? WoodClan

That is true. The other blanks of Hollyleaf are short-haired, I believe. -- Tinsel claw  01:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, the other blanks are short-haired--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:27, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I'm working on it. Maplefern 11:14, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I had to do it twice because I forgot the ear pink the first time. Maplefern 11:28, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else that I could improve on? Maplefern 23:40, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Add a highlight on the bottom of the herbs (on the right of them, our right), and make the ear pink go down all the way to where the lineart of the ear ends, and don't have the ear pink filling up the entire space, and blur the ear pink a lot, and make it (the ear pink) the color of her kit version. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:34, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Just realized that. Thank you. Maplefern 11:31, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Anything else? Maplefern 11:40, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs blurring and I can hardly see the shading. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:59, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me if the ear pink needs more blurring. Maplefern 12:01, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else I could do? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!15:32, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Milkfur(D)-For approval
I know,the chest shading is messed up,I'll work on that.Suggestions?help?comments?critque?--Firepelt 22:28, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

can you take it out of the thumbnail so i can see it better? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

i would darken the ear pink a bit. -- ♥Shine star♥  22:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darken ear pink-Check --Firepelt 23:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

It's too small. You've made it in the size of the thumbnail version. You have to click on the image on the main page, then save it to your computer and edit it.-- Tinsel claw  23:40, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. i REUPLOADED IT,MADE THE FUR MORE OF A MILKY WHITE COLOR,FIXED THE EAR PINK.THE SHADING,AND THE LINE ART AND EYES.--Firepelt 23:38, December 7, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Is there going to be anymore comments?I have seen on a list of need charcat art that milkfur needed to be done as a depty.I need this one approved so if i gett 1 or 2 more,Ill be a warrior,--Firepelt 00:51, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Its only been a couple hours Firepelt anyway the shading looks a little messy.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:55, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be faded and the shading is blotchy and messy.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How's the shading now?I fixed it with the dodge tool,and added some where I had forgotten it.--Firepelt 02:00, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

He needs eye color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:14, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.--Firepelt 16:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Anything else?I tried to fix the shading.is it ok?--Firepelt 19:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

It's better but the shading on the body is a bit dark. Try making it the same color as the legs furthest from us and blur it some more.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:29, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart closer to his ear is blurred. Blur the shading more and add a pupil to the eye. (Get pencil tool brush 1 fill white pixlrs on the eye and leave 3 colored pixels. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:04, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading the best I could and I lightened the eye color,to dark of blue.I also I fixed the line art(sorry it was blurred!).Anything else?Firepelt 15:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

The shading still looks a little blotchy.Try blurring it some more-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:51, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

pixlr's blurring tool is like,horrible.I did the best I could with it,and it still looks alittle dark around the top of the front leg.Firepelt 22:31, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

I would darken the chest/back shading just a tiny, tiny bit if possible, and add some shading to the tail. Other than that, this looks great. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:35, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.I think i might be alittle dark,though.Do you think so?PIxlr's blurring tool dosen't seem right these days.Firepelt 23:40, December 10, 2009 (UTC)Firepelt

IDK but i thought he was a LONG hair cat but it doesn't matter (vicky changes things all the time!) thats whats fun! XD other than that perfect! --Echopaw 00:42, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you,echopaw.Hopefully,i'll get some more good comments,and it will be approved.1 more image on my way to a warrior.Firepelt 00:46, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Now the shading's a little dark. Try making it the same as the tail shading. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:00, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I am like,having a HORRIBLE time with pixlr's blurring tool.I did the best i could!Firepelt 22:31, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Brighten the eye colour a little. Maplefern 22:33, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink and shading still need blurring.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:22, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Firepelt 18:00, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

can you try to blur the shading alittle more. I know pixlr's blur tool isnt the best. also your siggy isnt working, its just writing.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 18:05, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I blurred the shading.Anything else? Firepelt 19:22, December 13, 2009 (UTC)Firepelt

Blur it some more on the back. And yes, Pixlr's blurring tools aren't the greatest. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!22:50, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Blur shading on the back-Check.Anything else? Firepelt 01:17, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Are the back legs supposed to be shaded? Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!11:31, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I can't belive i forgot to shade the legs in the back! Firepelt 22:20, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

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One-eye (E) - For Approval
I don't really know which eye is 'clouded and sightless. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 03:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The cloudy eye is the one that we don't see (On this blank) So I'd color the eye amber. The shading could be blurred a little more, and I'd probably add some shading to the front paws too. And I can barely see the ear pink--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:27, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

how abought blurring the shading?? *Ivy jingle jingle!!*  07:17, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and darken the ear pink just a tiny, tiny bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:41, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think she is white, not grey. But if you intend to have a grey pelt, then it is good. Maplefern 00:28, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

No, One-eye is pale gray, not white--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry it took so long. Fixed the eye and blurred the shading. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 05:09, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Looks better, but the front paws still need shading--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 05:21, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 03:24, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

That's better, but make the eye color more amber. Right now it looks gold--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:32, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 03:37, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm, it still looks yellow to me. Amber is like a light reddish-orangeish-brownish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:52, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Make it almost orange with a tinge of yellow. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:55, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 01:17, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Better, but it still looks too yellow. Try adding a pale reddish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:44, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The eye looks fine to me. Just add some shading along the hindleg curve and this will be ready. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:33, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Fritz (Lo) For approval
I hate this image... So, comments? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:54, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The black is too dark. Make it somewhat lighter so we can see the lineart. Put a highlight in the eye (a white pixel), and blur the ear pink and white patches. Make the far ear seem more torn than like it just vanished.

And please stop asking me what I think on my talk page. Post your art here, and I will comment here. -- Tinsel claw  22:15, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I will stop, but I did blur the spots and ear pink, oh well, I will just blur it more, thanks! -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 22:53, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, Nightwhisker, do already have an image up? I thought you did. Oh well, maybe I'm imaging things. Besides that, the spots need blurred. They look like you cut them out of paper and glued them on there. I'm not trying to be rude, but that's just why you need to fix them, that's all. --Honeyrose34 23:30, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is far too big and bright. Burn and fade it once you make it smaller.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:11, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the green in his eye. I can't see the eye. Maplefern 11:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC) Reuploaded OK, I fixed the image, so, any more comments? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:12, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded OK, I fixed the image, so, any more comments? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and smudge it. he only thing is that the whole body's pitch black and doesn't look right. I have no idea how your going to fix that now. -.-'--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:55, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is actually a very dark grey. I can see the lineart. Maplefern 11:34, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

This is in the thumbnail size, not the regular size. But I don't know how to change it without redoing the whole image. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 13:47, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I got some things for ya, 1) The ear pink is too bright. 2) There is a smudge that comes out of the line art on the tail. 3) I see a pale gray background. Please make it transparent. 4) The black is so dark, I don't see ANY of the line art. Please fix those probs. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

The background looks fine to me but the earpink is too big.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:45, December 12, 2009 (UTC)


 * You need to use the fullsize blank. I think you'll have to redo this completely as I can't think of any way to sucessfully enlarge it without distorting it. (unless one of you amazing photoshop people have a way?) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas!  22:30, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I reuploaded the image, and I fixed some of the problems, what are some more things for me to fix? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 23:28, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

blur the patches more and try and make some a little less regular as they all look very circular right now. Add shading as I can't see any. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:34, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Cloversplash (W)- For Approval
Comments?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:14, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front paw. And I see a red-ish color on the midriff. Fix that and I think she'll be ready. :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:30, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the fornt paw (the one closest to us) needs to be blurred. That's all I see. Nice job!! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Nice job Jingle(or do I call you mouse?)!!But could you add the pink to the ear?

oops forgot to sing. Hidden -jimgle ♪  00:17, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I cannot believe I forgot the ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon <span style="background:tomato; color:lime;"> Christmas is on the way!!!   01:07, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Meh, it's not the first time it's happened. :) Now, Cloversplash's description is a dark brown she-cat with a white splash on her nose, yes? It never says muzzle. So perhaps you could make part of her nose white. Yes, that does mean the lineart. -- Tinsel claw  22:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe take the white off some of the muzzle.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 01:53, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

No, take all of the white off. Only part of her nose is white, not her muzzle. -- Tinsel claw  22:22, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Say NOTHING about the white flash. I haven't blurred it yet on purpose to see if I did it right. Well?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:56, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Well, the shading around her hauch should probably be blurred more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:02, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

There is a hole is the lineart at the nose. Maplefern 11:56, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went on ahead and blurred the flash on her nose, and fixed the shading.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:05, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

The flash looks great! Just blend the midriff shading a little more and the chest shading and she'll be good for approval. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedBlurred it as much as I could.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 21:05, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with it. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:28, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Chirp (Lo)-For Approval
Wow I haven't been on in a while! :) Here he is, Chirp! I just love that name...comments?-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  11:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's pretty good. Maplefern 11:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a bit more pink in the ears -- Santastar Merry Catmas to all and all a good night! 12:12, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes really need blurred. --Bluestar1776 20:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did that help? P.S. This is my first Charart as a warrior! ^.^ -- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  21:09, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good Mossy!! All I can see is maybe make the shading thicker, and what others osers said. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes just look to dark and "solid" to me... try running the dodge tool over them a bit, and blur them a bit more. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:43, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, thicken the shading (that's on the edge of the lineart, the shading inside the fur caused by the highlights is okay, but either brighten the highlights some more [only a little bit] or darken that other shading as well [only a little bit]), and blur the stripes a lot more. Glad you're back on. ;) These tabby stripes are awesome, by the way. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:37, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for 6 days... please work on it!! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 22:17, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (CG) - For Approval

 * I sort of darkened the shading a bit too much, didn't I? I tried to do it by looking at the tutorials.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 10:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the shading does look a little dark and bumpy. Lighten and even it. Good job though! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:07, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:05, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

nice work Lighting :) there are some white bits of color on the tail lineart, and back lineart. otherwise I lile this. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:00, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! Just a few things 1)The space in between his legs and paws should be gray, not white (See Moss that grows by river, or Night of No Stars) The ear pink and nose pink look purple. Try making them more of a reddish color 3)I see two white pixels on the tail--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:06, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink so it won't look so purple.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:05, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. Do the mud streaks look a little awkward?–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * you have one white pixel on the tail still. as for the mud I've never done it before so don't know :/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:42, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I think that the problem with the mud streaks is that on almost every Tribe cat they're all the same thickness. Normally, they would be narrower at the ends. But, as I said, almost every image has mud streaks like that, so... Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink and the nose pink still look very purple--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:15, December 10, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 09:52, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

You still have a white pixel on your tail. But the ear pink and nose are better. Maplefern 11:44, December 11, 2009 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 11:55, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose need to be more of a rosy colour. Also, the mud streaks look painted on. Look at the approved prey-hunter stripes as a good example; these haven't quite been perfected on the caveguards yet. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:36, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Crowfur- For Approval
The highlight on his hind leg is really bugging me. I've played around with it a lot, but can't get it to look quite right. Any suggestions? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 22:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Good; but the color seems to cut off at the head and into a lighter area...? The scars could be blended more. And maybe darken the shading. Other than that it seems fine.--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 22:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

This is good, but is the muzzle supposed to be white? Or is it tinged silver because of age? If it's tinged silver, I'd smudge it then blur it into his face, because it looks like he was born with that color muzzle. Btw, I LOVE how you do that missing fur! Did you do Graypool too? You're really good at that!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:40, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall, I did Graypool. Anyway, onto the image. The whiskers look like they have a couple missing pixels; fix that. Great job, otherwise:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 22:54, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry Flamingmom!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:55, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay, everyone makes mistakes:D --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 22:57, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Good job! Just blur the ear pink more. Oh, and did you reserve Crowfur on the Project page, 'cause I didn't see it. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:09, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Crowfur's page (Last I looked) said that he had "a silver muzzle." That may mean silver-tinged with age; and if that's so, is there a picture I could use for reference on how to make a silver-tinged muzzle? Oh, and sorry, Flamingomom! I actually modeled the fur off Graypool (Since it looked so good), but I didn't mean to copy you or anything! I'm real sorry about that. And, yes, I did reserve Crowfur. But if you want to do him, Rainwhisker, you have my full permission to, since my Crowfur isn't anything to look at. =P -- Angelstar Silver Bells 22:08, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

No, I was just wondering. Sorry! And your Crowfur looks really good. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:51, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay. =) Sorry, I didn't want to make you feel awkward or anything. -- Angelstar Silver Bells 00:55, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay, Honeyfur:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 01:13, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the hindleg curve and the chest. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:38, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 02:45, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Swallowtail (A) - For Approval
My second apprentice, fourth charart. Comments? Criticism? Her article didn't specify what color her eyes were, so I chose amber. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see her eye color at all--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:20, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Night. Lighten it. Blacktail Leave me a meow:) 23:54, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and since you have a highlight on the head, put one on the shoulder and rear leg too.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:01, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anything else? When I tried to darken the shading, it got too dark, and I couldn't blur it well. So I left the shading the same, but added highlights as Minnowclaw said. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 15:48, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the eye colour a bit more. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:59, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Snaketail-for approval


IDK about him...--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 01:03, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Yay! You're back, Minnow. :) Snaketail looks great, only thing is move the ear pink a bit more snugly into the ear, and make it darker and blend. -- Tinsel claw  01:34, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ya, sorry for leaving you guys, I have been addicted to Howrse for the past 30 days or so. Any better?--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 01:50, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Please?--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:46, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks very thin and isn't blurred very much - perhaps use a thicker brush on the fade-out style so it looks more of a natural transition and you won't have to blur as much considering your stripes. (if that makes any sense) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 20:54, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

I have three test this week and then off so please don't decline!--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 23:44, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whiskerpaw - For Approval
Well he's back. My first try at highlights on an apprentice so comments?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:23, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

I'll admit, this is WAY better than mine!! Anyway, The ear pink just seems too round. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

The highlights seem weird. The one on the head is oval and over the eye. Maybe try moving it towards the muzzle? Maplefern 11:51, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think i made the earpink too big. Maplefern the face highlight is like the one on Reedfeather, but if more people agree with you I'll change it. -- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:33, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I like it, just blend the shading and highlights more and it looks good to me. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:26, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Did the best I could do on pixlr. Better?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great. People complain way too much about pixlr and its blurring tool. You've done a good job here and Echo does her blending with pixlr and it is flawless! There is no strength in this anti-pixlr arguement (that i have probably used a couple of times myself). Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:39, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Tadpole (K) -- For Approval!
Hey, Tadpole's back! Since he still didn't have an image and Rainpelt's verson left, I thought i have a go at him. Comments? Hopefully, no concerns!! :) -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Maybe add some highlights,the lineart is a little hard to see.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:04, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

well, i was actually gonna post it again as i have become active here again, but i wont go ohez noez a lot, so no worries from me. i cant see shading, so make it darker, and add a bit more green to the eyes. &#91;&#91;user:rainpelt&#124;rainpelt&#93;&#93; 01:31, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not seeing much eye color... -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 12:01, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Um, Rainpelt, his eyes are supposed to be amber. Not green.-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded -- Don't know if the changes showed up... -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

his eyes gotta be hazel from what i see. hazel is a greenish brown rainpelt 00:16, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Rainfur(W) - For Approval
I really wanted the Firestar's Quest cats done, so I decided to do Raintail. I don't really know how the darker flecks turned out. Comments? Hidden -jimgle ♪  19:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Great work on the spots I think they should give it immediate approval. But his name is Rainfur. WoodClan 20:10, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, his name is Rainfur. I changed the title for you, and make sure to rename the image. It's no biggie, I get names mixed up too;) Anyway, the image is great, but I think the spots should be less round and more irregular. (Oh, and your signature is misspelled; the "Jingle" part of it has an m instead of an n. Just letting you know:) ) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 20:23, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Make the spots more irregularly shaped and placed.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 20:43, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I reauploaded the new Rainfur, so sorry that I wrote Riantail. I did the flecks more irregular with the help of teh charart of brambleberry. And than you, I hadn't realized m,y siggy said Hidden-jiMgle. Hidden -jingle ♪  03:05, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

They still look too regular. Look at other spotted cats for help.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:46, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder and haunch highlights.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:43, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Tornear (E) For Approval
Well, I figured Tornear needed an elder picture. What do you think? I tried to make the stripes look as much like his warrior image as I could. How is it?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I love the neck and below, but the head looks bland, add a highlight and some more shading over there.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:45, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better Minnow?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:42, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Tigerheart (W) For Approval
Hope you guys like it, Because Tigerheart doesn't have a warrior image, here's one. -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 00:18, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

This is awsome Nightwhisker! I love your tabby stripes! But I think the shading really needs to be blurred more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:19, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

OK, i'll blur the shading more -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 00:52, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunches more.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:08, December 13, 2009 (UTC) Darken the pelt and make him look more like his apprentice and kit versions--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw  16:44, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Whitestorm (D)-For Approval
Okay here he is! I am waiting for comments on my Nightwing. I still have to blur the shading on her. XD Anyways enough of my Nightwing talk. Here is Whitestorm as an awesome deputy! Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:29, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Grr. Shading doesn't show up good. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:31, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is working it's just too light right now, darken the shading and lighten the highlights. Also, the highlights are a circle becuase that wouldn't be what a highlight would look like on a cat. Make the ear pink a lighter pink and then move it down. Last, blur the shading and highlights more.--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:34, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

How do I make the highlights less of a circle. And how do i lighten them? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:37, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

To make it lighter, go over more times until it's a good color. The make it less of a circle, move your mouse around when your making the highlight and don't just click. Also, it kind of helps me to put it on a lower hardness so that is doesn't look that much like a circle--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Red; Background:Green;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Red;">Minnowclaw 16:39, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Oh and how do I move the ear pink down? What tool do I go over the highlights with? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:41, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Very goog, Icestorm! You use the dodge tool to add highlights. Also, run over the shading lightly with the burn tool; I can't really see them. Other than that, I think it's ready. :) ~  MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:05, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you Mumble! Should I add highlights again? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:09, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

It looks good, Icy!!:) Like what Minnowclaw said, blur the ear pink and lighten it up. Couldn't do Fallowtail right now, cuz I'm not allowed:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:28, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The highlights seem too obvious. Blurr them maybe? Maplefern 22:58, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his chest more.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:09, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

In Bluestar's Proophecy his eyes are blue not amber eyes.Echorain3

His eyes have been mentioned as sandy-colored yellow and blue. We decided on yellow, so this is fine. Darken the shading and blur the highlights and the shading together fully. -- Tinsel claw  17:06, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Snowfur (K) For Approval
-Well, I did the best I could. This is my first Character Art. Critisism wanted! (I also fixed it) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Tinselbreeze ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 19:39, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Couple of things to fix:
 * Don't color the fur pure white. Color it a very very very whiteish gray, so you can shade it.
 * Shade the image. If you use Pixlr or Gimp, click on the burn tool and run it over the areas that need shading (neck, top fo head, sides of body, under the legs, bottom of tail, etc.)
 * Fix the areas on the lineart that are blurred.
 * Add a highlight in the eye (white pixel). Only one in each eye. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 21:15, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Two things, first this needs to be a full size image, I fixed it for you. Second, she has needs to have gray tipped ears--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:31, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall, this is the fullsized image! See the early approved archives for Kitsu's reasoning on giant kitties XD This needs shading, the eyes need colour and the eartips need to be grey. Rainwhisker has it pretty much right - just follow her instructions and we'll go from there. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:41, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, adding on to what I'd said earlier, try using the sharpen tool (because the charart is pure white) and run it over the blurred areas. Or, you could fix the lineart by putting the blank over it (ask Bramble to help you). Oh and Sandy, how'd you know I was a girl? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 15:47, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

It seems like you uploaded the image over Snowkit's(OS) image. Rename it something like "Snowfur.Kit" and then reupload it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:50, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I've already done it. I renamed the file Snowfur(K), Moonshadow, so please upload on that file name when you update, please. -- Tinsel claw  22:23, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Pod (Lo) - For Approval
I know I should've posted Heavystep first, but I was having some trouble with the deformed leg. So, in my spare time, I made Pod. Comments/Criticism? --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 21:09, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any highlights or shading.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:09, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Mousey. It looks kind of flat. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 00:01, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

It also says "muzzle tinged with silver". Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!19:56, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Moonflower(q)-for approval
queens don't have a transparent background and I don't know how to get it to be so...can anyone help?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 21:33, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes look... scary. Look at Icethroat's tutorials to see how to do the eyes. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 21:36, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

I've turned it transparent for you. Very nice tabby stripes, by the way. Fix the eyes, and it should be good. Very good job. -- Tinsel claw  21:55, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded...and thanks bramble-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 22:01, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes still look odd, maybe use strait black for pupils? I can't see them. ~  MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:03, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Ohp, never mind about the can't see them. Maybe make them thicker though? ~  MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:07, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

It's nice, but what's with her eyes? She looks cross-eyed--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:29, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Check one of Icethroat21's eye diagrams.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:11, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, but there are different way to do a queen's eye. Look at Lilyfur, Cloudberry, or Splashnose--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:14, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I would maybe lighten up on the stripes a little, they're very close together. And it doesn't say black stripes, just that she has darker stripes. But the shading and highlights are very nice--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:14, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I'm inclined to disagree with you on the stripes Nightfall: I thnk they look great, not too close at all. If you look at a picture of a silver tabby with darker stripes then the stripes are generally this dark (eg a silver bengal - I cannot be bothered to find a picture right now, sorry ! ^_^ I will if you really need me to, but just google it or something). I would advise you don't change them Bracken, but then that's just my opinion. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:24, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded is this okay?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:37, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

It's perfect Bracken. I've just engraved a picture of Moonflower the way I think she looks into my mind, so don't bother with my comment about the stripes. And the eye looks ten million times better! Good job!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:34, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? (Also wanted to apologise for my leaving the images that have reached 24 hours for now; I just don't have time to fiddle around with all the different places different things need to go right now. Sorry Bramble and the other senior warriors, I feel lazy leaving them but that's life ^_^) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 21:41, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderpaw (A) - For Approval
Minnowclaw (my mentor) and I have been working on this for a little bit and she suggested to move it to here so I did. Comments? Suggestions? <font color="White" style="background:Magenta">Spottedhead The Shadows Are Rising! 23:19, December 12 2009 (UTC)

It is a good picture. The mentor-apprentice program is not on anymore, however. The lineart is blurred at the top of the front leg and the tip of the ear. Maplefern 00:29, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is touching the lineart, put a little gray between it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:12, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think that you over used the blur tool! On her back, the line art is blurred, and the ear too. Also, the eye is missing lines too. Fix that and you'll be good!!! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Sedgewhisker - For Approval


The other WindClan cat of the bring-back-the-water patrol that hasn't been done yet. Comments? -- Tinsel claw  04:16, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

This is absolutely gorgeous, Bramble! Although, maybe you could lighten the eye color a teensy bit; it kind of blends into the pelt. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:56, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Eyes are lightened. -- Tinsel claw  17:03, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:22, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Speckletail - For Approval


The pale tabby queen who became an elder. My second cat! Please comment.--Night shine 05:47, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty dang good. The only things I can see would be to blur the tabby markings some more, darken the shading, and darken the ear pink. Onther than that, you did well. ; ) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:26, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Mumble said it all! LOL! Yeah, all I see is the stuff that Mumble already mentioned! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Hopefully I made it better ^^--Night shine 23:32, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Your picture automatically updates, so you don't need to re-post. Just reupload it. As for the image, personally I think the ear pink is too purple. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 23:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the ear pink color--Night shine 01:04, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Brick (R) - For Approval
My first rogue (I think...) We have no gender for him(?) but I thought he(?) could still have an image seeing as he(?) has a full description otherwise. I did him(?) as male (hence me using 'him' and 'he') but figured that if he turns out to be a she then it will be simple enough to change the blank. Therefore, constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:45, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it makes sense that it would be a he (A she-cat named brick? xD). I don't see anything wrong with it. Great work. : ) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:24, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Feel free to ignore my comment: the eye color is a tad too bright. My computer makes many things too bright. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Urm, I don't think Brick has ever been mentioned as being ginger. Ignore me if I'm wrong. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:52, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Brick is a girl, it says it in her article, but ignore me if i'm wrong. Other than that, This looks great. -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 16:58, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

In the manga she's in, she has eye lashes. It makes her look pretty feminine. Although, she doesn't have a white patch on her back; she has a patch of fur missing, about right between her shoulder blades. It's too bad that everything in a manga is gray. But since we assumed that Ruby was gray, we can just assume that Brick is ginger. -- Tinsel claw  17:00, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Okay! I made her a girl (when I looked at her article it said unknown gender, I'm sure). I kept her ginger but changed the white patch to a section of missing fur. I lightened the eyes. Also, the upload log is playing up again so I changed the file name. Bramble, pretty please can you delete the old one? Brick.rogue.png (I feel bad asking you again but... sorry.) Any more comments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:24, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Tangle (R) - For Approval
Tangle! ^^ I'm really proud of this one.--Night shine 04:28, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

This is good!! I would make the "ragged fur" a bit thinner, though, like Raggedstar's image. Also, darken the shading a tiny bit and darken ear pink. Fix those and this should be good. (: -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:59, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

He's awesome! -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 17:51, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. I ca barely see it. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!17:55, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I edited it--Night shine 03:45, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

It looks much better. I would just blur the ragged fur a tiny, TINY bit. Not too blurry! -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:56, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Pounce (R) - For Approval
I feel bad about exceeding the image-limit, but it won't be the 38th for long (I hope). Anyway, I tried to imitate what his stripes looked like in the manga, which is why they look like that. If I need to change them, I will. Plus, I changed my sig. Everyone was calling me Flamingomom because it didn't say "Hawktalon"XD (Not that that's a problem, or anything^^')(I would've named my username "Hawktalon", but I could only use my mom's username for her Verizon Yahoo account. I have no e-mail account. Whatafail). But, enough of my rambling on. Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 20:14, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

WOW!!! I love this; it's beautiful. Just blend the shading a little and I can't see anything else. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:34, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Sandy:3 I blended the shading some more and, on a whim, I decided to lighten the highlights a bit. Better now? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 23:19, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see any white in the eye, but otherwise- AMAZING!!!!!-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:47, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, my, GOSH! This is beautiful!!!! But yes, there needs to be a pupil. But this is incredible--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:39, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks Mousetalon and Nightfall^-^ I added the eye-white (how could I have forgotten to do that>_<). Oh, and I had the weirdest dream last night that Goldenflower was once a ShadowClan catO_o... --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 20:34, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Lizardfang (E) - For Approval
- Well, there's a 24 hour call on at least half a dozen images so here's to hoping I got the description right this time... Constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:34, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Saber-toothed kitteh! Lol Anyway, I think the tooth could be a little less yellow or lighter. But otherwise, this is amazing! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 23:02, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, maybe the colour is different on my cp as it doesn't look that yellow to me. I did it like that because she's old and old cats have yellowing teeth. I'll lighten it tomorrow. =) Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas!  23:03, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

As usual, wonderful job. And I agree with you, Sandy, the teeth look fine.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:46, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Forget what I said about the tooth, my computer was being stupid, it made the colors all messed up. The tooth looks fine now:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Hawktalon Merry Xmas! 20:37, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) - For approval


I was surprised no one had made/reserved him when I did... anyway, he's been gathering dust in my files while I've waited for Snowfur to be approved (she just was!!), so here he is. I think I might need to darken the stripes. Comments? Concerns? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 01:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

His eyes are white, he may be blind, but Jayfeather does not have white eyes. Make them blue, please. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 01:46, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink appears purplish and the tabby stripes are too blurred. Feel free to ignore the marking part. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!02:03, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather already has a Mc picture by Dawnfeather-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes are way to blurred. And the highlights on his face look like cobwebs, as do the ones on his legs. Blurr them some more please. And yes, Bracken's right about Dawnfeather's picture. I don't really know if it's been approved, you'll probably have to ask Bramble or Sandy--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:38, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well, Jayfeather is still an apprentice on his page, and he hasn't been reserved by anyone. So I would think that ment I could do him. My computer is sick, so I need to get on my mom's to fix those things. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 11:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whilst Dawn's image was very good, it was never submitted for approval as far as I know and so has not been officially accepted by the project. This can stay up. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:04, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sandy. Anyway, I fixed the things you guys said. I had to save a new file because the changes weren't showing up. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 23:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Screech of Angry Owl (PH) - for approval
I really hope no one reserved this already, or done her. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 05:48, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry sandwich, she's wonderful, but Ivypool's already got her up for approval. She's up at the top of the page--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:36, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

I'll check. Cause when I did my Daisyheart, i didn't. But this time I chekced. I looked on the for approval's, the reservations, and looked at Mist's page. And none of them had her. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:05, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Never mind, I screwed up again. Hers was up on November 25, and I made my resrvation later. Fair is fair. Consider this declined. Unless I can find another gray one. But I cant beleive I did this again. I feel like such an idiot. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:07, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

OK, I am gonna change it to Screech. Give me about...1-2 days to work on him.<span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:16, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Q) For Approval
Well, she was mentioned as a queen twice, so I figured she could use a queen image. Okay, and the highlight on her stomach, I don't think I can blurr it anymore. I HATE Pixlr!!!!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:04, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Oatwisker (e)-Declined


what do you think? rainpelt 11:54, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Rainpelt, Lowbranch doesn't even have a description. We need to do cats with descriptions--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:45, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

look at the image summary. names are in a way, descriptions. Branch for one. and eyes often come from the mother. rainpelt 22:01, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

This is true but you still can't be sure.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Rainpelt, but without a known description we can't just give her an assumed one. Unless you can find another cat with a known description for this image, consider it declined. -- Tinsel claw  22:31, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

made it into an elder using same colors. rainpelt 00:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - For approval


Ok, so I know he doesn't have mudsteaks, but some other cave guards don't either so I didn't think it was nessicary. I know this is over the limit of 35, but two are in the 24 hour stage and 1 has been declined, so I figured I should put it up already. As for Stormfur, he should have stayed in ThunderClan. ;) Comments? -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 00:17, December 16, 2009 (UTC)