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Thorn (Hunter) - For Evaluation
Hope I did this right! 17:57, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

The blank is too small. Make sure you're downloading it properly. Try downloading it from here. If that's not the problem, then make sure you aren't changing the resolution when making the charart in your art program. Thorn's image also requires texture. Hope this helps. ^^ 18:58, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? There's tutorials here on shading if you're confused. 21:22, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

it should also be the short-furred blank as well. 21:28, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

^ so use this blank instead my bad 21:48, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Also, could you add/define the earpink? 00:21, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely redone with texture and defined shading & ear-pink -- 16:57, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

This is great! Smooth out the shading overall and definitely add some on the body and tail. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:05, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Lovely! Add some shading to the tail and add some definition to the eye color.  HA WK FI RE98  17:06, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Add the notches ears and define/make more visible the texture. 18:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and the earpink. 20:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Can you darken the texture by a few shades? I can barely see it. It seems much light than the others in the set. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 19:55, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded added another layer of darker texture, defined eye shading, added tail shading and ear notches. Thanks for all the support! Unfortunately, the program I use doesn't really have very good options for smoothing shading and it's very difficult to do so without colour distortion so please could I have a second opinion on the smoothness of the shading? Thanks! Also, what do you mean by define the ear-pink - should I remove the blur? -- 13:19, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

By define the ear pink, I mean make it more visible on the cat so it doesn't blend in with the fur. May I ask what program you're using? And, do you have the shading on a different layer from the base color? Either way, could you define the tail shading some more and add some shading depth, too? 14:06, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded defined ear-pink and tail shading and darkened shading in some areas. I use Krita (without any custom brushes) and yes, I have the shading on a different layer. -- 17:25, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Ah, I've never used Krita. I'm assuming it has an anti-aliasing box, so could you try turning it off when using the blur tool/the equivalent on the shading? 21:25, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs and face.

21:26, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Darken/define the tail shading, should have some running all along the top of it in this light source 21:52, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't find an anti-aliasing box but I found a different way to hopefully blur and define the shading on the tail, legs, and face at the same time. 11:59, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

Remove some of the shading on the legs/limbs to define your light source. This is where the light his hitting the charart and creating that 3d effect like you did with the tail. ^^ 19:03, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

Alder(Hunter) ~For Approval
I hate the earpink, but I wanted to get this up Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:40, September 15, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall. I know you said you disliked the earpink, but it's only supposed to be on one ear, the one closest to us. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:28, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

No, you can use both ears for this blank. The ear pink is a good enough color and doesn't look too far off from what I have. ​​

This is really great, I love the pattern. Define the shading a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  02:28, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, sorry Hawky, I didn't see you! you commented while I was making it :POwlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 02:37, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Sharpen up the pattern; the kit is first and the pattern is much sharper and the fleck-like specks of brown are smaller.

I agree with Hawk, you can't even really tell what's shading. But can you expand the ear pink, the tip of the ear doesn't have any Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 03:11, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

These blanks don't require the entire ear filled in; most of them don't and it's optional. ​​​​​​​

Re-up, not even 24 hours, and I've already done a re-do, gg life, gg Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 06:03, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Owlbite, defining the shading does not mean darkening all of the shading in its entirety. It means maybe picking locations that are the furthest from your light source and making the shading on those areas more apparent. I usually just use the burn tool and darken the edges of those areas and that works pretty effectively. ^^  HA WK FI RE98  12:30, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Lol, I re-did it, and it made the shading weird! Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 16:57, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, It does have earpink, I defined the shading, and I sharpened the pattern. Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 19:55, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Did you sharpen the pattern up? This is still too over-blurred. ​​

Could you define the pupil? It seems to blend in with the iris. Also, the light source isn't very clear, at least in my opinion, so could you maybe make sure it's consistent in its placement? 15:21, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The pupil is fine and eye style is artist's choice. ​​​​​​​

Could you define the shading depth on the main body more? 21:25, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The eyes should be a light green color to match the other images. 22:35, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The eyes is a eye style I am useing, and her eye coler is not mentioned, can I get a second opinion? Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 05:39, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

You have to match her other images with the eye coloring... which in this case, is a lighter green coloring. ​​​​​

I feel like there should be more light on the thigh. 20:03, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, okay, I tryed, but I dont realy think it worked on the eyes or shading. and it is ALOT sharper. Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 00:38, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

The speckles need to be a bit sharper. You're getting there! And I believe the eye color still does not match. Download one of the other images and try colorpicking from it (meaning, copy the color to your pallet so you can use it). And you have some leaking shading on tail. 19:08, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, I just found there was a tiny bit of wase EVRYWHERE! (its gone now.)  Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 00:10, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the hind paw closest to us? 18:03, September 22, 2018 (UTC)

the shading looks flat. Add a layer of depth to it everywhere, especially on the main body

Half Moon (Healer) ~ For Approval
this is not my best work but white cats are hard :/ Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:51, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and define the facial shading.

Lighten the chest so it stays consistent with your light source (it looks like it's coming from in front of her head?)  HA WK FI RE98  21:21, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

The tint looks a bit neon, but it might just be my laptop. Warriorct (talk) 20:54, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is tinted and various other images across the wiki have used almost the exact same coloring. I believe blue is being used here, and it helps prevent the image from looking extremely gray. ​​​​​

Re-Ups, yes it is blue. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 21:38, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the areas where you removed shading (you can easily see where you erased - like sharp lines in the shading). And there's leaking shading on the hind leg furthest from us. And define the light on all the limbs/paws with the exception of the front leg furthest from us. 22:33, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

There's a lot of erasure marks on the haunches and tail - just figure I give you a reference of where it is. 00:18, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Those aren't erasure marks, they're suppose to be there. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 00:57, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

The marks on the hind leg and end of the spine don't look like they're supposed to be there. They are squiggly (for lack of a better word) and don't match any other color/highlight on the image.  HA WK FI RE98  01:00, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

That's how I smudged my shading, not erasure marks. The only erase marks is on the tail and thats just the hard edge of the shading. I used this type of shading on Shattered Ice as well. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 01:11, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth them out then, they look very sharp and harsh Malina457 (talk) 03:17, September 19, 2018 (UTC)malina

It kind of looks like there's a brush tool used here to add white? Regardless, I'm going to add on to the majority here and say that it needs to be smoothed out a lot, since it stands out way too much and they do look like erasure marks. ​​

Re-Ups; I removed the erasure marks; I don't think I forgot anything else. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 09:04, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

I really like this. Comments before approval? 08:29, September 22, 2018 (UTC)

Could you fix the leaking shading on the hind leg furthest from us? And define the light source just a bit on all of the lower limbs (so elbows down)? 16:37, September 23, 2018 (UTC)

Crowfrost (Le) ~ CBA
If Ravenpaw gets a rogue image for mistakenly being called a rogue, then Crowfrost get a leader image for mistakenly being called a leader. Comments? 23:44, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

I really don't think this is the same thing... loners and rogues are similar, so that's explainable. But he was never actually a leader at any point.  HA WK FI RE98  23:47, September 17, 2018 (UTC)

I think this counts, as we've done things like this for almost every other rank, other than that, define the shading Malina457 (talk) 23:59, September 17, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded. Tawnypelt also got a deputy image when she was mistakenly called the ShadowClan deputy when Tigerheart was deputy at the time. 00:08, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Hawk, I don't think Crowfrost would get a leader image. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 03:46, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

We made a deputy image for Tawnypelt when she was describe as the ShadowClan deputy in Thunder and Shadow. She was not deputy at that time, and we did not know that she was ever deputy until River of Fire, yet we still made an image for the mistake. How is this any different? 04:03, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

She shouldn't have gotten one either. It adds confusion, especially for people from outside the wiki visiting the character pages. They will be confused why they have an image for that rank even though they aren't listed or categorized as that rank. It promotes false information.  HA WK FI RE98  11:13, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

this isn't the place to argue this. start a section on the discussion page, because as it is this qualifies. 11:34, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the tail? And yes, this counts. We document all mistakes, regardless of being rank or description, and that's final. Discussions are fine to bring up, but definitely not on the image itself when it does nothing but take up space and takes away from what this section is for. ​​​​​

Reuploaded. 18:52, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Straying away from that discussion, could you center the white on his face? The other images show it on the middle of his face. 21:28, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:45, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

can you make the white on the belly wider? It seems to me like its to thin. and the white on his face, (I know this, I did his kit image,) top one needs to be thinner and the bottom one needs to be longer, and shuldent this be labled as alt leader? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 05:34, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Owlbite, there's only a small portion of the belly shown, and Bluestar has that section all filled in with white. I think you're referring to the chest. Personally, I don't think Bluestar needs to expand the white on the chest. Crowfrost has white on his chest section and not the shoulders, which I believe is what Bluestar has represented here.

For his kit image, the kit blanks do not have defined shoulder lineart, unlike the deputy and star blanks. Therefore, we have often referred to the artist's preference as to where to define the shoulders on the kit blanks. Meaning, it's your choice as the artist. The chest can be a small portion of the kit blank or reach to the entire area. Blaze and Dew Petal are good examples I can think of. The same applies here for the leader blank. Besides, I think it makes more sense for a slimmer white chest because of the nature of the warrior image, but both would be accepted in my eyes. I hope this makes sense? 22:57, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

yes, but the face comment is still in the clear, or did I miss something? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 00:35, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:13, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

Remove the white on his lower haunch? I don't think is supposed to be there. 19:10, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:25, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

it dosent look like you made the top face like shorter, but good job on the lower one! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 00:14, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:07, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 08:30, September 22, 2018 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (Healer) ~ CBA
mud on a brown cat = no bueno. 19:59, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

He has a lot more dark markings on his kit version than he does here.  HA WK FI RE98  22:38, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Most of the markings are covered with the speckled mud, but I can try to mess around with the mud again if you like. Downsides of being a brown cat lol. 22:59, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

That makes sense! I would like to see some more dark markings personally, but you're welcome to ask for a second opinion! ^^  HA WK FI RE98  23:17, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

I'll work on altering the mud coloring in a bit. ^^ It has been bothering me too, and I think I can make it more visible. 19:11, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 22:22, September 20, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 08:30, September 22, 2018 (UTC)

Violet Dawn (Hunter) ~ CBA
there's something wrong with this that I can't pinpoint

Add the darker marks on the ears? 13:13, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded like that? (her dark markings are hard to see omg)

Her eye color looks really dark! In her other images it looks lighter.  HA WK FI RE98  15:06, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

WOH! can you smooth out the neck shading? This is AMAZING! <font color="#6633FF"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 02:34, September 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanku

Comments before approval? 08:37, September 22, 2018 (UTC)

Snail Shell (Hunter) - For Approval
Eh. <span style="">15:38 Fri Sep 21

I understand your light source is coming from the backside, but it really looks like there's no definition on the back and shoulder. It just looks very flat.  HA WK FI RE98  15:49, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

The backside looks fine imo. I think expanding the shading there might help though? 22:06, September 21, 2018 (UTC)

Can you blur thie spots a tiny bit? <font color="#6633FF"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 02:35, September 22, 2018 (UTC)

Expand and lighten the shading in general

Reuploaded <span style="">13:48 Sun Sep 23