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Flick (Ro) CBA
reserved it and finished as fast as I could. I hate this. Dx Changes might not be showing...Changes are here. Comments?

12:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, but needs a transparent backround 12:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Grr. I know. I can't get a transparent background... when I took the blank from the charart page, it was white... 12:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a proper light source and define it. 14:29, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I can make it transparent for you if you dont know how to do it, ,16:47,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks :) 21:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, reuploaded. Experimenting with fur textures. Gahh, changes ain't showing, look right here. I lightened the neck shading just a little bit. Yuck, yuck, yuck. I also have one without the texture so if you want to see, tell me. 01:31, April 3, 2012 (UTC.

The fur texture looks like mottles. Define the shading and light source. Don't worry, practice makes perfect! Also, blur the earpink. 05:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

All right C: Redone. I made one without texture and one with, but I'm going for the one with texture, even though it's atrocious, it's the less atrocious of the two 05:35, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

The fur texture still looks like mottles... 00:36, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I wanted it to look like that, but I can change it. If you all like the non textured one better, I can make it the non textured one 00:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I know you wanted it like that, but sorry, it doesn't really look like fur, more like mottles. And this is a short haired cat, any smudging on a short-hair would be less dramatic. 02:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

All right reuploaded If changes ddon't show, it's here 03:03, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:52, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767433748300.png 03:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

You'll need to dull down the highlights or blur them or something...I don't think it should be that glossy-looking unless the description calls for it. Plus, it seems unnatural. 06:03, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I redi it :) 18:42, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Gaghhhh.... better? http://www.iaza.com/work/120407C/iaza17767482237200.png 18:45, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened shading, defined light source, fixed blurred lineart and ears. 23:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is 80% and better. Add a bit of depth to the eye, and perhaps slightly blur the edges of the back shading. Nice job. :3 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you so much :D 05:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Move the haunch and chest highlights up slightly. 02:08, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:11, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the neck shading. 15:31 Thu Apr 12

Reuploaded My uploads of this may be a bit delayed... hope to get this CBA'd soon though. Up to the leads though, and I understand if ya think it's not ready. ;) 00:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Please be patient, your image will be CBA'ed when ready. I'm sorry, but you might have to redo the shading or so. Because I see 3 light sources when there was only supposed to be one. One light source coming from the top, when from the left, one from the light. Move that haunch highlight farther to the left, also, thicken the shading, darken it, then smooth it out, It's a bit flat now. 06:32, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:22, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

I feel like doing a re-upload today. :/ So I darkened shading and fixed the highlights. Rowan told me to blur shading in PMs so I did that too  20:04, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten/Blur the shading. 22:58, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded feels good to have something to do again ^^ 23:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Looks nice. CBA? 00:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) (Alt) ~ CBA
I'm really proud of this :3 Changes aren't showing. 11:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste at the ears. Make her muzzle shorter and extend the line on her face. 13:33 Tue Apr 3

Can you also define the eye color? To me, it looks pure white. 21:58, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry about the white on the side of her mouth. I tried getting rid of it but nothing worked. 23:19, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch and back scars look a little thick. The scraggly fur could be a little smoother. Could you also darken the shading and blur it some? 16:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's defined to the max, but I blurred it. 23:05, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste by the ears and there's a line coming out of the bridge of the nose so get rid of that and I'll CBA. 22:39 Sat Apr 7

Reuploaded I also got rid of that white part near her mouth. 18:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Her ear seems to be split a little more deeply and raggedly than her MC that I made. 22:36, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

When I copied the colors and everything, I made sure the ear tear was exactly the same. 20:48, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 06:29 Wed Apr 11

Sorry to interrupt, but I feel the belly highlight/area with no shading should be extended, as it's kind of small right now. 01:58, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I tried working with that, but when I do that it sadly comes out bad. 22:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine. CBA?

Minty (Ro) ~ Under evaluation
Okay, I'm rusty at this, and fail at shading, and feel like I'm about to do somethinf wrong, I will add shading after I'm done testing with it, seeing which seems more normal, and yes there is shading on the tail, and yes, I tried to get as close to the original image as possible, and yes, I suck XD, please don't hurt me *hides* Because I'm sure I'm doing this wrong XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:16, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Btw, added note, someone might have to help me with the shading XD I am Your worst nightmare  23:18, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more, make the ear pink less neon, and lighten/blur the highlights. Not bad ^^. 23:19, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lol what shading, the only shading on the charart is the tail XD, and by less neon you mean darken? And alright, going to blur the highlights now XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:21, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I added shading I am Your worst nightmare  23:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it File:Minty.rogue.alt.png? <3 00:26, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's what it is. I am Your worst nightmare  00:29, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oh wait, alright, nvm XD I am Your worst nightmare  00:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  I am Your worst nightmare  00:33, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's not an alt..... rename it just plain Minty.rogue.png 00:55, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  I am Your worst nightmare  01:01, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

No capitalization. Minty.rogue.png exactly. 02:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Well you could have said that the first time. I am Your worst nightmare  21:38, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Not bad, Birdbrain. Blur the highlights. 23:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  blurred highlights, but now the shading looks seriously messed XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

You can redo the shading if you want, but blur it too, and the highlights. 02:14, 05, 04, 2012

Alright, I'll have to redo the whole image then, because this was made on Pixlr X3, I'l have to do it after the weekend though, because I'm going to my trailer. -- I am Your worst nightmare  23:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, can someone help me with the shading? I'll do the rest x3 I seriously suck. I am Your worst nightmare  00:08, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think.... I think if you let someone take over or help you... you can't call the image yours anymore? You'll get it with practice... maybe look over the shading placement thingy in the apprentice tutorials. 00:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I've tried that, nothing works, I'm just naturally sucky at shading I am Your worst nightmare  00:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm... try redoing it, and maybe... the shading placement is your choice, but try to replica the highlight/shading placement on another cat. Blur the highlights, and define a light source. Maybe doing a quick check over the Apprentice Tutorials would help, even if you don't think so. Keep trying ^^ 21:21, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading placements don't work for me, plus, Pixlr is weird, and I have no idea on why Gimp isn't liking me at the moment, and I was never good with shading, and I've been doing chararts for awhile (Not on this site, other wikis in general) shading is not, and probably never will be my strong suit X3. But fine, I'll try to redo it. I am Your worst nightmare  22:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading looks fine the way it is, maybe I should brighten the highlights instead of stressing myself over shading, what do you guys think x3? I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  16:42, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, just smooth out the edges and blur it a bit more-- 20:26, April 11, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

The shoulder highlight seems to be in the wrong spot, I would move it a tad to the right. Also brighten it just a tad. 15:34 Thu Apr 12

I don't think the highlight on the end of th' tail is supposed to be there. It's not there on any of her other images. 02:11, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Back when I was still here, tail highlights were also supposed to be part of the image (Even though, that might have been at another wiki, but still, or someone told me to do that, I forget.) It's a habit, and habits are hard to get rid of. And Mountain, it used to be in the right spot, until I blurred the shading. I'll just brighten it, because it is in the right spot, just doesn't look like it I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  19:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Pinenose (Q) - For Approval
I finished The Last Hope today, and it didn't feel... complete to me for some reason. Here's Pinenose. Comments? 19:16, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 20:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin'  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 01:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around her chest and the right forepaw~ 14:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes should show when there's no more waste. 23:23, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also around the tail, I forgot to mention that ^^; 01:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I cleared it all, so it's okay. 15:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

There looks like there is some waste or blurred lineart around the chest/neck and the front leg furthest from us. (Could just be me). Looks wondeful! :3 20:31, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

...XD Raven, that's what she cleared. Blur the belly shading a bit c: 23:16, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:38, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make her face and tail shading lighter. Pretty.~ :3 23:34, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added highlights, can remove them if desired. 01:10, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the highlights? 14:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:23, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 12:10, April 15, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the earpink. 23:02, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:26, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little more. 16:30, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Ro) ~ For Approval
Chu changes showing? Anyways, Clovertail's rogue. It's ugly ;-; 12:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sweet! May be just my computer, but define the earpink and the shading on the back legs. This is great! 12:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:56, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights", or at least make them a little bigger, but it's your choice :3 *steals* 15:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 15:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the back of the paw darker than the front. 17:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

You should difine where the light is coming from, it looks like its coming from three places. 01:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, too~ Oh, and Bracken: shading placement is artist's choice :3 02:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry! I'll re-upload in a few minutes! 21:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading. 21:49, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the shading on the haunch and back, and define the eye depth a little. 23:37, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and tail shading  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 05:08, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the flank "highlight" bigger. Totally optional. 22:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded =3 00:23, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, your light source doesn't really make sense. There's a highlight on her back, as if the light was coming from above, but there's not one on her tail, and then there's one on her face as if the light was coming from the front. Choose a light source please. 15:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Pine (TS) (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments? 03:44, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 03:47 Mon Apr 9

Define the ear pink just a tad? 04:08, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems too dark, and the scars seem a little too straight. 19:55, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'd rather leave the scars as is, they seemed rather straight in the comic. 20:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm assuming your light source is coming from below, if so, lighten the belly between the front and hind legs. Breeze whisker  03:17, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's coming from his front. 03:20, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. X'D Then you should probably lighten the ears and go higher up with the haunch shading highlights. Breeze whisker  03:27, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fffff, white cats... 21:18, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Ro) ~ For Approval
This was unbelieving hard to do. I am no good at tabbies xD. Suggestions for improvements, please! 12:41, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Color the nose. :3 <span style="">13:40, 04 09, 2012

Upload it over the old image and match the desing with other images, you cant just change the patch desing. I dont understand why you choosed so hard cat to do. , 14:30,April 9,2012 )UTC)

Trololol I was actually planning on doing this to save someone XP Define the tail shading. Although this does look over 80%... 14:57 Mon Apr 9

Add the pale belly, muzzle, chest and paws C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 23:49, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-named and re-uploaded. Too many changes to list. xD 04:22, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful!! Maybe blur the earpink and the sharper streaks of white on the stomach :3-- 04:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think it is too dark xD 06:02, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes still don't match. 12:34, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit less neon-- 19:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Some of teh earpink looks like it's leaking out of the ear a little x3 21:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Lessened ear-pink and made it less neon. 01:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. 02:39, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:59, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes, make them darker and shorter like on her kittypet version. 12:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

She looks so wonderful! <3 I would suggest blurring the darker shading quite a lot. -- 15:23, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

This isn't bad, especially when you're trying to match a Mounty. Smudge the stripes more. 22:49, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure this is over 80% done. This is now for approval and Berryflower will become an apprentice. 23:33, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole image a tad-- 01:16, April 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Re-uploaded ♥ ♥ Berryflower ♥ ♥  Ima like a field of BERRIES!! 05:26, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

It still doesn't match. Please match it. 22:31, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on her front leg. 11:42, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tint the shading with a warm color? 02:44, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (Ro) ~ For Approval
I found a spot! Yay, first charart up in a while. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 23:03, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Are there scars? I can't quite tell. If not, add them. 8D 23:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Is there a light part along his back? If so, make it brighterr <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Take the earpink from his warrior (if you did, take it directly from the center). If you did that...then just disregard this x3 05:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   May the odds be ever in your favor 11:14, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could be my computer (I'll try looking at this from a different one later) but could you make the earpink a little more pink? Blur where the back highlight meets thhe shading to smooth it out. Nice job ^^ 13:06, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the scars pink to match his warrior? And what Ivyshell said. This is beautiful! 19:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 20:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scars brighter and maybe more red. They're kinda hard to see.... 21:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Nice. <span style="">11:28, 11, 04, 2012

Does it look a bit green to anyone else? It looks kind of green to me. 23:37, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

You're not the only one, Cinder. Not sure if it looks like that to any others, but could you (maybe) get rid of the (possible) green-ish tint? 08:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the color looks like the warrior but the warrior's shading is brown tinted so just make the shading a reddish brown color instead of black, keep the base coat the same. 15:40 Thu Apr 12

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  22:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm... blur the shading a tad. 23:05, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it any more. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  10:54, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Dodge (Ro)~ For Evaluation
My first charart. Comments? If the picture isnt showing, its here. ~Fallen 23:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nice for your first charart. ^^ Blur the body shading a bit and slightly define the stripes. <span style="">11:22, 11, 04, 2012

Define the stripes they are hard to see 12:18, April 11,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stripes defined and shading blurred more. Thanks, DJ :3 --~Fallen 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This is pretty for a first. Define the earpink at the tips? 22:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image has a yellow-green hue. Fix that? 23:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look yellow-green to me ._. 15:41 Thu Apr 12

I think it just looks yellow... Tone down the highlights(?) a bit. 00:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ear pink. I did`nt use any layers, so I darkened the main color. --~Fallen 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 01:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading, since I didnt have highlights, and blurred earpink a bit more. --~Fallen 03:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose a little bit. It looks a little neon to me :P 17:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think if you darken or make the base color less yellowish, this could be just about 80% done, in my opinion. 03:18, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Ro) ~ For Approval
Hey guys! Another rogue up. C; Rogues win all. You know it. Comments, please and thank you?

02:33, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nice one! Define the tail shading, if any. And darken the front faraway leg to match the back faraway leg ^^ 02:35, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:41, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Uhh You went off the old one I think right? That's a triangle tabby, Boulder's images are being redone so you can do whatever tabby style on this unless Paleh is still gonna do the other images. 03:58 Wed Apr 11

Blur the flank shading. <span style="">11:16, 11, 04, 2012

Yes I plan to. I think I have an open space, so if I do then I'll post my version now. If not I'll do it ASAP. XD Or send you the file on chat to match. 20:34, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid stripes completely, based off his new elder. 01:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat and add/define the pale belly and chest. You want the xcf for the colors? 14:24, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:42, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 06:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:05, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more 23:06, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:15, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken the white on his tail? It doesn't seem to be covering the whole side. 02:21, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:32, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur/smudge it now? 20:26, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Onion (Ro) ~ For Approval
I'm proud of this one. c: Umm...I forgot that she was short-haired, and I made her long-haired (lol, fail), but I'm going to keep her this way since she only gets a rogue image. Comments for improvement? 04:50, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the belly shading just a tad. Also, if there's no specified pelt length, it's artist's choice. =P 11:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also (to everyone), about the belly shading, please don't tell me to blur it, since even though it may look like it needs blurring, it's the effect of a black patch on the belly. 23:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink extend down a little more? 15:42 Thu Apr 12

I'm not sure, because I don't like the earpink to extend fully down the ear. However, if it's needed, feel free to disagree. 23:45, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I sorta like it the way it is... anyway, can you blur the face shading a tiny bit? <3 14:28, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Could you also blur the haunch shading a little bit? :3 23:30, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (Ro) - For Approval
o.o Another rogue. I think this looks okay. Comments for improvement? :3 <span style="">12:01, 11, 04, 2012

Aww, cute :3 Define the shading  12:12, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it a tad, too. 12:13, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome~ Add a couple more stripes and define the pale belly/chest. :3 12:32, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too hard, (bad at explaining) blur them a bit. 01:08, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  The stripes might need a bit more blurring still. <span style="">02:40, 13, 04, 2012

Can you maybe define the earpink a bit-- 17:09, April 13, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded -  Not much of a difference, but better? :/ <span style="">03:35, 14, 04, 2012

Make all of the tabby stripes more closely-packed (you can add more stripes, too) like on the other images. 06:24, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the hip joint looks a little funny. Could you lighten it so that the hip and the back merge together a little better? Breeze whisker  03:26, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Snowy (Ro) - CBA
Comments? 16:51, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading moar :3 17:44 Wed Apr 11

Reuploaded. 20:25, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading a bit? 13:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind legs and the tial. Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 01:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad o3o 19:43, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:03, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

C to the B to the A? 8D 00:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments for Improvement? 23:20, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the highlights/shading so the white stands out? The entire pelt seems gray.

Like that? Changes may not be showing though. 23:29, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful! :3 There are a few areas of shading that you may want to blur (Around the belly area and around the shoulder) 11:42, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole image a tad. It still looks gray 11:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the scars. 17:59, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

D'awwww, I wanted this one Dx Darken the eye color a tiny bit, unless you took it from the leader '-' 21:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

And I think he needs a longer tail. 21:55, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No he doesn't. Only cats like Tallstar, where it's a prominent feature, will get longer tails. 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 20:23, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define and smooth out the shading. 06:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleh, his leader image was tweaked to have a longer tail. 00:30, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

...... It was? e.e *facepalm* It shouldn't have been..... we discussed that before.... *sigh* Well if his leader image has it, I guess it should match... 02:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

So I make the tail longer? 16:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading too? 19:32, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink a little bit, and define the shding on the back leg farthest away from us. 19:42, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Jag (Ro) ~ CBA
Doing Jag again. =3 Comments? 04:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more mud and put some lighter mottled in it? :) 05:10, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Extend the earpink down a bit? 15:46 Thu Apr 12

'''Reuploaded. '''=D 23:58, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

8D Blur the mud and maybe add some fleck-y parts around it~ 07:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. I think it' sust my computer though oEo 21:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

The patches seem to have a slightly greenish-yellow hue. Fix that? 06:25, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Nah, it wasn't your computer, Rowan. =3 I attempted to fix the greenish-yellow color on the mud. But sorry Dazzle, I kinda like it not blurred. xD 22:09, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?

Nightcloud (Ro) ~ For Approval
I'm not really happy with the new info released by Kate... I actually sympathize with this poor cat, and I'd think she'd give her stupid son a cuff over the ear for betraying his Clan, not that she'd run off with him. Ah well. Comments? 20:57, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah... Oh well. *shrug* Define the shading a little bit? 23:50, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:49, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just a preference, but could you add a highlight/lighter part around the belly area? It looks sort of lonely and flat there. 22:20, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not. Unless she's really fat (which she probably isn't considering she's a WindClan cat), that area falls behing the shoulders and elbows, and is thus in shadow. 23:31, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Should the nose be black...? Or can you get black cats with pink noses..? -doesn't know- <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:36, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you can...can you desaturate the nosepink, at least? 14:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

You can, though it's uncommon. *cough* Nevermind, I don't think it is..... I was thinking of a bicolor cat. But regardless of that, the nose should still be black to match the queen. And I have to agree with dazzle, a lighter spot should be added on the side. Even if she's thin, her whole ribcage isn't flat. It'd still bump out, and therefore the light would hit it. 23:02, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit?-- 23:51, April 14, 2012 (UTC)Moonshie

Guys, enough with the shading placement comments. It's artist's choice, and she doesn't have to change it. Although, Paleh's right about one thing. The nose does need to be black.

Re-uploaded. Made the nose black. And no, cats ribs do not stick out past their shoulders or their frontal knees. Observe this chart of cat muscels, which displays the cat's front knee falling in front of the ribs and thus casting it logically into shadow. 21:15, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Stick (Cat) (Ro) ~ CBA
Comments for Improvement? 23:43, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Awesome Rowan 8D 04:21 Fri Apr 13

Maybe thicken the nick a bit. o3o Nice job, Rowan~ 07:33, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks 8D 22:29, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the flank and thicken it. Also, thicken the lineart by a pixel on the torn ear. 06:22, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. Fail with the ear nick. 17:50, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading. 14:41, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Blurred to the max. 19:38, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 01:32, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle (Ro) ~ For Approval
It feels awesome to have another charart up for approval. ♥ Comments? . 06:14, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

8D Thistly~! You're finally uploading again<3 Define the shading on the legs and tail~ 08:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded . 08:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistly<333 Define the earpink a bit. I love this<3 10:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistley <3333 8D. Smudge the stripes a tad more? Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 12:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

This is so much btter than mine <3 Define the earpink. 15:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thansks guys. :) Re-Uploaded . 17:45, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Do you think you can make it match the older rogue a tad more? Just a tiny bit? But that's your choice. 19:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I will have to say no, sorry, As the aritst this was just my way of trying to making it mine, as yours was to you. :3 . 21:28, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Very good Thistley! Define/sharpen the stripes a bit, and make the earpink color match the elder image. <span style="">02:42, 14, 04, 2012

Nicely done. Darken the shading some more. 06:20, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Well I was actually wanting to ask if the elders' earpink could be tweaked...because it's sort of an un-natural color. And Re-uploaded. . 22:09, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading. (If you do nominate it, I can do it because I have the .xcf/.pxd file.)  11:40, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Rock (Alt. Ro) - For Approval
Gah forgot the mud. Anyways, this is basically what I came up when I searched for jagged stumpy tails, and since his cg is being redone, and hiw normal rogue is currently up, I think we should just change it. I don't think the current version of the tail is very realistic. Comments? 16:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on this tail a bit? Love it! <33 . 18:04, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Epic kitty is epic. Blue the foreleg shading a bit~ 04:51, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

blur the highlight/lighter spot on his back <333  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 19:35, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - So basically blur all the shading. XD 14:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Stripes (Alt. Ro) ~ CBA
I hate shading on black cats. Comments? 00:42, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. 00:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, you reserved the wrong one, and I undid your edit. Go fix that, 'kay? Error on both our parts. xD

Oops sorry, forgot it was the alt. 00:50, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:41, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Also, this is just my preference, but maybe smudge the earpink? <span style="">02:30, 16, 04, 2012

Reuploaded 22:25, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 00:38, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Crouchpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Well, TheBoss2 lost their reservation, so I decided to take it up. o3o Comments? 12:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black so we can see the lineart and make the highlights contour more naturally to his body. 13:16, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

And make the earpink a bit more pink 17:33, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink tooo~  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 19:34, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made the highlights too bright in contrast to the rest of the body...;.; 22:59, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and define the earpink a tad. 03:21, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) - For Approval
Once upon a time, this was one of the first three images I ever did for Tweak Week, so some nostalgia can be accredited to this piece :3 Though nothing special about my work on it this time. Any comments for improvement? 20:43, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Whats on her muzzle? Or is that like, her flattened muzzle? Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 23:13, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Ya, that's supposed to be there. Blur the flank shading. 23:15 Sun Apr 15

Reuploaded  02:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Q) - CBA
As much as I don't like the outcome of her choice, I still like her character, as well as her design. Though, I have to admit, this became a much bigger challenge than I thought it would be. I think I need to tweak the shading color slightly even though it's the same color from her MC, because to me, it just looks odd. Anyway, I'll leave the nitpicking to you guys since that's what you're trained to do ;D Have fun. 21:31, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I love her! Just blur the earpink a little. This is so cute. 22:35, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Love the chararcter and the charart! :3 Can you define the shading? And I also think there is some waster around her tail and near the ear farthest from us. (but it might just be me) 23:22, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a little smudged next to the other inages. o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:27, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did not smudge the stripes at all. But I did remove the fur pattern from the image because you were probably confused with that 02:29, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? <3 02:59, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (Ro) - For Approval
As far as I know, this was declined before and nobody else reserved it/got it approved, and I needed a charart to do~ :3 Comments~? ouo 22:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. 23:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Make the earpink more pink. 14:47, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken it just a tad? :3 <span style="">19:19, 04 16, 2012

Blur the shading on the haunch and tail C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 19:22, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this... 03:12, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 03:32, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gimp always spazzes on me when I do black cats, so sorry if it's messed up. 03:50, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink? c: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 05:48, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. ^^  14:57, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Half Moon (Alt. He2) - For Approval
Yeah, I probably named this wrong... But she was mentioned as dark brown in TLH (who does that?) so I snagged her 8D 22:17, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Yup. Named wrong. Rename it Stoneteller (Ancient).healer.alt2.png :3 And, could you make the smudges curve a little more with the body shape? Wonderful, Loonie~ 22:51, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:54, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the fur texture? She looks mottled instead of fuzzy (no you don't have to get rid of it) 22:56, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

...Loonie...I'm probably wrong, but it didn't specifically say it was Half Moon walking with Graystripe...when I read it at first, I thought it said that, but reading over the cite again, I'm interpreting it as a random Ancient cat walking with Graystripe...please don't shoot me. ._. (At least, where I think it calls her brown....where's dat citation on her page, missy? >:|) 00:46, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

^^Urg. Ignore that..Loonie persuaded me otherwise...and I'm supposed to 'state how incredibly wrong I am'. So there ya go. xD 01:03, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

darken the earpink? it's very bright~  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 03:07, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ro) - For Approval
My eyes finally wised up so I could get the lineart. Lineart credit goes to the wonderful Mountainheart. Aye Sir! Comments? 02:25, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

In some areas (the bottom of the tail, belly, and front chest fur) the lineart looks thick. Beautiful work by the way 02:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? 04:57, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes to match his warrior/deputy/apprentice. 11:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)