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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Honeyleaf (Ro) - For Approval
Won't be able to reupload Mon-Fri because I'm going camping.  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 15:23, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker and softer, looking at her deputy and loner. 15:25, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Expand the shading on the tail and the foreleg furthest from us. 21:04, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body and haunch area, bit sharp there. The shading everywhere else though looks fine. You're doing a great job so far! 21:58, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste beside the hind leg closest to us.  Crystie  Can't help loving  me  01:43, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah sorry, should be reuploaded by tomorrow.  Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:36, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Smooth the shading a bit on the shoulder and hind leg closest to us? Nice work! 03:22, July 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups

There's shading leaking from the lineart on the paws, and smooth the shading on the flank/stomach? 00:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the haunch and all legs except for the front leg farthest from us. 22:24, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Define the light on the main body and haunch more, amd smooth out the shading on the front leg closest to us. 14:21, July 20, 2019 (UTC)

Ivytail (ShC) (W) - CBA
18:50, July 21, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 22:01, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Hickorynose (W) - CBA
02:07, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Hollowbelly (W) - For Approval
he hungry boy 03:27, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a little bit of white to his stomach? 02:04, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the white a little bit more. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:05, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Minnowtail (W) ~ CBA
i always wanted to do one of her images!

CBA?

Leafpool (W) ~ For Approval
not a fan of this

Brighten up the paw white on the back paw closest to us a little bit? 14:13, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a bit more...brittle? So to speak. They got a bit more sketchyness to them. I think on some of them, the OA used like a fine faint pencil tool with the base color and drew over the stripes to get that effect. Maybe that'll work? Also the tips of the ears should be dark brown, and can you thicken the facial stripes a bit? Overall, this is very good ^^ 02:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks Vec for the advice!

Define the shading a little more? <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:06, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Lionblaze (W) - CBA
Lionblaze!! 13:35, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the stripes are slightly softer on the apprentice 16:04, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 16:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I love this. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Mothflight (Ki) - For Approval
ADHD icon. 17:32, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Recede how high the shading goes on the haunch just a little bit^^

Molewhisker (TC) (Ki) - CBA
17:32, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:55, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Molewhisker (TC) (W) - CBA
17:32, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tops of the hind paws should be brown. 22:03, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. They were, but I guess when I blurred the cream it spread a lot higher, so I receded the cream. 23:37, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:56, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Larksong (SS) (K) - CBA


17:59, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Larksong (SS) (W) - CBA


17:59, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:45, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (W) - CBA


17:59, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:46, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. W) ~ CBA
All colors from original image. Comments? 18:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:46, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. Ki) ~ CBA
All colors from alt warrior. Comments? 18:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading a bit more. 19:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:15, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Tansypaw (Ki) ~ CBA
All colors from original image. Comments? Also, I realize the stripes don't quite match the other images, but when we added stripes to these, the original kit was the first to be posted. So shouldn't those match this? 18:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I think the rest of the set should match the og kit. CBA? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) ~ For Approval
an attempt was made.. 19:02, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

She needs stripes and dapples on her tail, the base is also a tad too gingery. 19:07, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading also appears very blotchy and uneven. Also, can you define the light in the eyes? 02:18, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes and dapples seem darker

Re-Uploaded! I wasn't exactly sure what you meant by the 'stripes and dapples seem darker' thought?? 14:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

seem darker on her other images. sorry, not sure why I didn't finish that sentence

The stripes/dapples appear rougher on the other images in the set. 14:26, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 15:00, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Lionheart (W) ~ For Approval
No joke this took hours but it's finally done. I was a bit confused which stripes to match...since the set doesn't really match exactly so I guessed rip. 19:24, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the old warrior+deputy before the deputy blank redos are the first in this set. ​

seems like the only other image that shows this side is the star.

I used a mix of the star, old warrior, and apprentice when creating the pattern. I attempted to go off the star for some (mostly the legs, face, and some of the tail), but as I looked closer, I am convinced the stripe style doesn't match. The stripes are overblurred, and more linear/streakier on the star, rather than the irregular and bulbous shapes on the other images. But if others disagree, I can always give it another shot. ^^ 17:00, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Lionheart (K) ~ For Approval
I don't think I add the ragged fur because the cite was from when he was a 'paw but I'm too tired at this point lol. 19:24, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Mintfur (RC) (W) ~ For Approval
I guess the two Mintfurs fought and he lost 20:46, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Lioneye (Ki) ~ For Approval


21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

The stripe color seems a bit off (could be my eyes), and the stripes also appear sharper and rougher (instead of smooth and sleek) as well. 02:20, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) ~ For Approval
21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Molewhisker (RC) (W) ~ For Approval
21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt. W 3) - For Approval
how did they make her ginger 21:35, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Morning Whisker (K) - For Approval
<span style="">23:53 Mon Jul 22

Do you want the file for the star? used the same colors as Beebs' old kit, except i can't find that file anymore. There should be more brown on the face

Lilyheart (W) - For Approval
18:17, July 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Macgyver (W) - For Approval
18:17, July 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Mousewhisker (W) - For Approval
18:17, July 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation
it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. top left corner. 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''