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Frostfur (Q) - CBA
- All colors came from her star clan 01:41, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the tail shading. 13:36, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:14, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the highlights on the belly.

Re-uploaded 14:57, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Don't darken but define the shading a touch 23:23, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:25, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define it more on her front legs? 01:26, June 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the belly shading Brick  10:14, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:07, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on her tail seems gray. Just lighten it a tiny bit. 18:00 Thu Jul 3

I think blurring the shading might actually fix that. Instead of lightening it, try to smooth the transition between the shading and where it stops. I've done that before and it seems to have worked out pretty well before.

Re-uploaded 15:10, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Snowbird (Q) - For Approval
love dat name does anyone remember snow bird from dr quinn medicine woman? 18:36, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and blur it a lot.

Define the light source on the face. 17:52 Wed Jun 25

re-uplaoded 04:05, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more on the belly.

re-uploaded 21:34, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the face shading. 18:57, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

re-uplaoded 23:01, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the facial shading a bit and blur the body shading.

re-uploaded' 15:24, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

If you use highlights, would you object to adding a small one on the chest? I'm having a hard time telling apart the shading from the base. If your source means that this area wouldn't be as bright, then disregard my comment.

re-uploaded 20:19, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Possibly move the facial shading to <-- of the face, since the tail shading is suggesting that your light source is coming from the --->. It just seems a bit off.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:29, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 14:11, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs, moreso --> one.

Re-uplaoded 01:12, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

anything else?? 21:32, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Add some bone structure to the facial shading, especially around the muzzle, and blur the tail and belly shading a little more, to make it look softer. Very pretty! 02:44, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Ryestalk (Q) - CBA
Here we go. All colourpicked from the warrior image. Leafstrike Talk  22:53, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Curcle the stripes on the back leg closest to us some. 22:57, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  23:21, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the belly and tail. 16:16 Fri Jun 27

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  00:58, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit? 15:38, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

I think it looks fine to me. Leafstrike Talk  22:00, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna slide in here and agree with Sorrel. Could you also try and blur the edges of the stripes on a really low setting. That's what I did for the warrior. ^^

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  05:08, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the shoulder facing us. 18:02 Thu Jul 3

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  00:01, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:30, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

I think the light on the tail is fine. 22:16, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Sunfish (Q) ~ For Approval
So like, apparently you can have a redone queen AND something else for approval now? I did not know this. Buuut here. All colors from the Warrior.

If I messed this up in any way feel free to shoot me Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:46, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on all four legs. 16:57, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define tail and belly shading. Brick 19:10, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

lighten her up a bit 23:21, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Shinxy Blitz and Melody 07:46, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on that hind leg furthest to us - there'd be ligh tni that position. 14:12, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:46, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit, and perhaps make the light on the belly a little more visible? Ah, I wish Sunfish had gotten more screen time, I like her. ;-;

'''Re-uploaded. '''I agree, she should have had more time V_V. In case changes don't show, have a link. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:26, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more on the belly.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:31, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Changes. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

lighten the shading a tad? it's throwing off the color 15:22, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I darkened it on the face, though, because I could hardly see it. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 21:42, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
Just colorpicked from Paleh's, but brightened that muzzle up. Comments? 16:55, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her face a tad bit more? Also, maybe lighten the shading a tiny bit, It looks rather dark.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:58, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

re-up I'll leave the shading darkness as-is unless told to by someone else, as it'd make her look flat. 19:10, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source on the face. Maybe getting rid of that line beside the <<< eye (our left) would help. Dem eyes tho *.* 18:06 Thu Jul 3

I think it's fine. The line is the shading for the cat's cheekbone, I believe, so it'd be there while parts of the face are in light. 18:10, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

thin it out some, her cheekbone wouldn't have that big of a shadow 03:19, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 03:37, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading, or smudge it, whichever you use. It appears to end quite abruptly. Also, lightening it by a few percents on the opacity bar probably wouldn't hurt, but that's your choice if you want to do it or not.

re-up smudged where it was needed 14:43, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit? 21:00, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

(this is not a case of 'I don't want to do anything' okay) Ahh I think it's fine, unless someone else agrees, and on what parts, specifically? 21:02, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

I think the facial shading could use a bit of blurring, or something like that, to perhaps make the transitions and areas where the light hit a bit softer. I also think the front legs, moreso <-- one, could use a little bit of blurring. Also, given your source (at least I think I'm reading this right), wouldn't the chest area have slightly darker shading in places (like right under the neck), due to it being the furthest from the light? See, I'm learning.

re-up 22:21, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading a bit on the face 22:19, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine unless someone agrees, ahh ;; 00:49, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Short-haired, wild cats are gonna be boney- these aren't plump cats, and with shorter fur, bones and joints are gonna be far more prominent. Facial shading should be the sharpest of your shading, and right now it's way overblurred. Remove some shading along her shoulder, and add a curve going along her belly to show that it's round, and covering up part of her side from being seen, as right now it's totally flat. 02:43, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Thing is, I keep on getting told to blur and define the facial shading, so that would be going completely against what I was told. For the shading along her shoulder, she'd look flat. There is a curve on her belly - although a bit faint - and you can clearly tell that it's round. I'll shade the parts being covered on her side, since that would have some faint shading, but other than that, I think it's fine. 03:03, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

You're entirely missing my point. Defining facial shading is sharpening it, and blurring it makes it worse. It may be that it was too dark? Either way, facial shading on any image should be sharpest. The curve on her belly isn't there at all. It should be on the right-hand side, going along the left side of the line defining the shoulder. Look at Hawk Swoop's picture for what I'm going at. Shoulders are muscles, and in a cat, they're vital for hunting and walking. Therefore, the muscle will be there, and prominent, giving them a beefier limb there. The shoulder won't be concave, and would cast a highlight along it, unlike what you have here, which suggests it curves and is being absorbed by the rest of the body. 03:07, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

To be honest, the facial shading/belly shading looks fine to me. Define the hindleg shading.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:34, July 11, 2014 (UTC) I agree with Leggy. Not everything is going to be soft and even and uniform, especially with cats. They have motions and basically their own laws of movement/nature/ect, and obviously their muscles are going to reflect that. Hawk Swoop's queen is a perfect example of what Leggy is talking about. ^^

Tangleburr (A) ~ For Approval
Uuuughhh, the markings and texture were annoying. Especially the texture. I've never done texture before- I had to guess. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:09, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Did you get the file from Berry? If not, I strongly recommend it. 17:11, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

No, I colorpicked from the Warrior. I'll go ask for the file ^_^ Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and light.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:19, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the colors on this match well enough. Defining the light and shading like Breezeheart suggested might fix the colors not quite looking exactly the same.

'''Re-uploaded. '''I hate shading apprentices so much o_o

In case changes don't show, here. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:19, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

curve the haunch texture a bit. 22:20, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I think it looked fine, and it was curved, but okay... <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:26, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and this could be good to go. 14:30, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:46, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (A) - For Approval
i like this comments? 18:19, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make his markings look more fish-like? 18:30, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

well, i tried already, this is a pike. that's what i tried to base this off of, and in other images the spots are bigger, basically there's not to great of a consistent pattern in the mottles in northern pikes, which is what i want to base this off of because of his name. 18:35, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make them vary in size, though? I love pike and it's kinda cool we got his gender confirmed

Blur the shadong some? <span style="">22:05, 07/1/2014

Re-uploaded I didn't erase any of the mottles I had but i added a new layer and added smaller mottles in a new layer 22:57, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">18:07 Thu Jul 3

Define the facial shading.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 14:13, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

anything else?? 21:33, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur your shading- it's way too hard-edged. Try to avoid using gaussian blur, which will give you the over-blurred, undefined look, and go for using a large, super fuzzy smudge tool to feather out certain areas. Shading will be softer on cuirved, plump areas, like on the haunch, tail, and belly, but it'll be a little sharper on bonier regions. 02:41, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Swiftbreeze (Q) ~ For Approval
Meh. <span style="">23:28 Wed Jul 2

The white is looking very gray, especially on the tail tip and paws. 23:32, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">1:08 Thu Jul 3

Still looks pretty gray imho. Also blur the stripes just a little bit.

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:47 Thu Jul 3

Her belly looks gray.. lighten that up a bit?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:18, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:46 Fri Jul 4

seriously people there's shading on her, of course she's gonna look a bit gray. e.e Beautiful work, Hawk, just define the shading on her legs 23:26, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you for your support, duck. <span style="">1:41 Sat Jul 5

Yes, Duck, but there comes a point where the shading is too dark on some places. Define the light and shading on her tail. Looks great, Hawk :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:09, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I'm just gonna say that yes, it can look gray, but it is more than possible to shade white and still have it look white. There's no need for "e.e" or something like that, so knock it off instead of acting annoyed when a critique is offered. If you believe it's fine, then respectfully decline the critique. The emotes which imply you're pretty annoyed is unnecessary- doesn't matter if you agree or disagree- we're supposed to be getting along, and Breezeheart is correct. There are times where sometimes the shading is just too dark- but that is a matter of opinion and artist's style, which the whole point of PCA is to bring together those styles to make art..not to bicker about whether or not something is right or wrong. Yes, the belly is gray, but I was talking more about the paws in my comment, which would have some light on them. I also know some people use off-white, which also contributes to it looking grayer than normal.

Re-uploaded. Hmm, I used pure white, and I am using black shading. I can't really do much to it without throwing off the light source and/or making it seem flat. I think that tinted shading, however, would disrupt the balance of the colors. Any suggestions? <span style="">19:17 Sat Jul 5

Tint the shading a little more red, which won't throw off your red-based brown, and lighten it a touch. See how that works and then we can see where it goes from there. :) 22:14, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Leggy, for the suggestion. That actually helped. <span style="">1:45 Sun Jul 6

I think the tint did the trick, honestly. That looks much better now. ^^

Define the facial shading a tad?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:36, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think it's fine. I'll change it if someone else agrees. <span style="">6:52 Sun Jul 6

I'm with Breezeheart on this one. Just a tiiiiny bit, though. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:32, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">18:20 Mon Jul 7

Molepaw (Star) - For Approval
Hello. Molepaw is adorable.

Shouldn't there be a bit more grey on his paws, like on his kit and apprentice? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 23:30, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I misunderestimated how much gray were on his paws. =P

Define the light on his tail a bit?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:12, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Possibly smudge the earpink into the fur a bit more?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:56, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

It's actually smudged quite a fair bit, but I tried something different this time to give it some variety.

Define the light on the paw farthest away from us? All im seeing is the shading.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:04, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

There's light there. It's not blindingly obvious, but it's there. If someone else agrees, I'll reupload when I get home.

I think it's fine - I don't think it should be blindingly obvious. 22:04, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded because Leggy said something on Skype. Also, seriously? Five days? I could understand one or two, but five? ._.

Snowy (Q) - For Approval
Hey there. I like this very much. / Changes here if needed 23:47, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source. Also, the shading on the belly and hind legs seems quite gray. <span style="">23:50 Thu Jul 3

Question: How do you define the light source? As for the shading, I'll have that up in a moment. 23:52, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups  23:54, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Defining the light source means to make the light face the same way everywhere on the cat. So let's say that your light source in in the top right corner. Everything in shadow would be everything from the bottom left corner. Idk I'm bad at explaining. As for the shading, It wasn't that gray. Now you need to define it. Sorry for the trouble! ^-^` <span style="">2:23 Fri Jul 4

Define the light on her foreleg farthest from us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:17, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups  15:22, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front two legs. Darkness-wise, I think they're pretty good, but they could use some slight definition. She's looking good, Rocket. Keep up the amazing work.

Re-Ups Thank you, Jayce :)  14:39, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading near the belly is a bit blotchy- blur it. This is good .o. <span style="">21:24 Sat Jul 5

Re-Up  21:28, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Any comments? 16:31, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading ont he bottom of the face and on her front left paw 17:16, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up  17:45, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
ew, I know. My first dapples, and I'm not entirely impressed. Changes be here 15:28, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 16:55, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes aren't showing yet 21:24, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

blur the dapples a bit. Also, possibly lighten them a tad to match the kit, apprentice, and warrior, that's up to you though. 23:28, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

I'm having a difficult time seeing the ear pink in --> ear. Mind shifting some shading around a bit so I can see it?

Reups changes 14:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her front legs.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:36, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 10:00, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

-nudges- 20:43, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Wouldn't there be at least some light on her chest?

That depends on the light source. The face is suggesting a frontal light source, so yes, there would be light on the chest, but the tail suggests from behind, where there wouldn't be any, depending on the angle of the shading. Like in Hawk Swoop's queen, the light from behind is at a slight angle, which illuminates the sharper bones in her facial region, but because cats don't have convex chests, the chest itself isn't lit up. 02:38, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Fallowfern (Q) - For Approval
Hey. 15:53, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and light on her legs. 15:54, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 16:04, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the belly shading, and darken it while you're at it.

IDK if it's necessary, but add some shading around her shoulder, too? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:29, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups. I'll add shading around the shoulder if someone else asks me to. It looks okay to me, but, then again, I'm a newbie 14:43, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, go ahead and do that. I think you'd need it with your source anyways.

Re-Ups I really hope it's shaped okay. This image is actually really, /really/ fun. 15:06, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Remove that bit of shading right by the chest since it doesn't belong there. And you might want to get a second opinion on this, but can you define the earpink a bit? Also blur the stomach shading a tad. 16:34, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. Ehhhhhhh... okay. The earpink is under the shading layers, I'll re-do it if someone else agrees, mainly because it took a few tries to get them right without seemind, well, neon-ish. also the shading is strange on her leg i know but that's the only way I could include the shoulder and not the chest. 17:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

By shoulder I meant that line between the belly and the head, but okay... Darken the shading on the legs slightly, maybe? And there's waste by her chest. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 18:57, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Better? I've got 13 layers of shading on this one cat... how did this happen? 20:42, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading; also, define the earpink a bit. i can barely see it, especially in the <--- ear.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:37, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups. I moved the earpink so it was above all the shading. 14:03, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her tail 22:44, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Sorry it took so long, I've been working and away from GIMP. 21:13, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Comments? 00:44, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the hindleg furthest from us; there would be light there.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:39, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Star) - For Approval
Since the other one got declined, I figured I'd give this a go. The face shading is bugging me, but I can't figure out how to fix it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:33, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Try defining the facial shading to see if that helps. One way I've found is good is to bring the layers back down so it's just your linart, base color (no stripes if you can) and your shading. 15:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

That helped a lot, thank you. I also changed the eyes a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:03, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the paw shading a tiny bit - she's a stunner. 22:42, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Defined. :) And thanks. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:59, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Rosetail (Star) ~ For Approval
Finally, she's confirmed! Comments? 15:56, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the earpink in this (--->) ear. Can you define it a bit? omg dem eyes tho O.O so pretty 17:28, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Rocket here. Also, could you blur the shading directly around the lower head/neck area?

re-up 17:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe put a little more shading in the ear, just on the inner edge? And the pupil is looking a little pale, maybe darken that a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:33, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Pupils are fine to me, since it's the eye color on the other images, and if I put shading in the ear, I'll get told to define it /again/, plus I have no clue what you mean by the inner edge =P 20:35, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

I didn't mean the rest of the eye, I meant the black part of the eye, it's looking a bit more like pale gray. I think it's from the shading. Before, you had shading on the entirety of the ear. I just meant for you to shade the inner edge. If the ear looks like this (/\ then I meant shade along the edge here (/ <-- if that made any sense. That'll show the shadow of the inside of the ear without making the whole ear completely in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:42, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

The black parts of the eye are pure black, as I just checked, but I'll get to the ear thing in just a moment. 20:44, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 20:45, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Nice. :) I just zoomed in on the image and you're right, the pupils are pure black. It was just the light shiny things in her eyes that made it look gray. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 20:47, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

How about a CBA? 22:43, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the paw shading (on both paws) and chest shading could use a bit more blurring. Also, just out of curiosity, did you shade the ears? If you did, it appears flat. If you didn't, ignore that comment.

I only shaded on the edge of the ear, not on the actual ears, dear. I'll re-upload with the chest shading and feets shading blurred in a few minutes or so. 00:02, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

re-up  00:05, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 16:15, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

don't darken but define the overall shading 15:19, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine unless someone disagrees - shading doesn't have to be overly defined. 15:36, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Bbun on this one I think, she's pretty. 16:30, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Well, I agree with Duck on this. A little definition never hurt anyone.

re-up 18:03, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ For Approval
Here's the new version Whew, first charart in ages. It's probably for the best that I chose something simple since it's been awhile xD. Anyways, comments? 17:03, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading leaks away from the lineart on her belly 17:27, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I cleared all of the outside shading twice to make sure it was gone, so there shouldn't be any. 17:35, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

No... I didn't mean outside of the lineart. Along her belly in just one little spot I can see white where there should be shading. Sorry to confuse you! 17:38, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's ok! I didn't notice that at first. Pixlr always makes the stomach shading leak away from the lineart sometimes 18:01, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Good work :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:39, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded and thank you C: 21:58, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

define the light on the tail. 22:22, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

The belly shading seems a bit gray. 14:29, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded It needed to be lightened, so that's why I did. 22:43, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Floss (Q) - For Approval
New lineart, new charart. Colorpicked from her loner image. this was fun c: <span style="">22:04 Sat Jul 5

Define the shading and possibly add more white spots on her belly, tail, and legs. 22:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I decided to use pure white because the shading was making it gray. hope this is better <span style="">22:11 Sat Jul 5

Re-up. Added highlights, since it might help lighten the belly. They're too bright, though, imo. <span style="">22:21 Sat Jul 5

Define the overall shading. Try tinting it, so it doesn't make the white look gray?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:40, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't think you have to tint shading, so I decided not to. <span style="">10:11 Sun Jul 6

the white is looking very gray, it almost blends in with the other gray as it is now. I'd suggest lessening the shading a bit,a nd I think a tint might help. 22:23, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">23:24 Mon Jul 7

I'm not sure, but is there waste around the image? 14:27, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

It looks a little fuzzy around the edges, so either waste or blurred lineart. 21:15, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. i hate waste tbh <span style="">23:35 Tue Jul 8

smudge the earpink upwards? 17:02, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

I decided not to smudge the earpink, since I sort of like the earpink as is, and I can't smudge it without not being able to blur it again. <span style="">00:19 Fri Jul 11

I agree with rocket, I can't even see that it's smudged. also, the white looks very gray. 00:41, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Cinderfur (Star) - For Approval
Colorpicked from apprentice image. 'Nuff said. <span style="">23:05 Sat Jul 5

Define the light on the tail and I'm having issues seeing the light source. The body says it's coming from the top left, while the forelegs says it's coming from the bottom left. <span style="">23:21 Sat Jul 5

Re-up. <span style="">00:11 Sun Jul 6

Make the nose color pink. His kit image has a pink nose, and i think his others do aswell.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:42, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i've got to blur that belly shading soon ._. <span style="">10:11 Sun Jul 6

Put some light on the front of those legs, they look a bit flat since they're totally in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten all the shading a tad, too? Except on the tail? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. i love dem eyes   Brick   15:24, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Add/define the tail light 22:40, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Sorry, I had day camp and I had to go home at 5:00, then I had other things. <span style="">23:24 Mon Jul 7

I see some waste near the tail. 14:29, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">23:35 Tue Jul 8

Add some light around the paws? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:53, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">00:19 Fri Jul 11

The shading on the paws are way to dark, and also there is alot of waste near the paws aswell. Maybe changing your light source would help, so that both paws have light on them. The way you have it now makes it look flat.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:37, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Palebird (Ki) - For Approval
shoves palekit at you <span style="">03:38, 07/7/2014

The earpink looks a little small, can you expand it a tad? *pushes Palekit back* Brick   15:00, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

the earpink looks fine, imho, but can you smudge or blur the shading a bit more 22:23, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Duck about the earpink. Define the eye depth a smidge -hugs Palekit- she's so freaking cute 22:39, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

'Reups she was also a pain in my rear to do lmao <span style="">23:13, 07/7/2014

Blur/smudge/blend the shading a little more.

Whiteclaw ~ (Star) For Approval
He needed a StarClan image. Color-picked from his Warrior and Apprentice images. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:20, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Those eyes are beautiful *.* <span style="">1:59 Tue Jul 8

The white paw seems a bit gray; maybe remove a bit of shading. 14:26, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Defined the shading, and lightened the white paw shading a tad. I didnt want to lighten it that much, because then i would get told to define it. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 08:29, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the paw. 15:20, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Like i said, i was told to lighten it, and then told to define it. :/. Defined the shading on the paw. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:53, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

You can have lighter shading and it still be visible. If you want lighter shading and visible at the same time, perhaps try unblurring the shading a bit? Defining means to make more visible. It does not mean darken. I think PCA needs a group lesson on what the difference is between define and darken, myself included.

Bright Stream (Q) ~ For Approval
Used the colors and tabby pattern of the other images.

Could you try making it match the StarClanner more? That's the image that is also showing on this side (the rogue shows a different side.) 14:09, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading. 14:25, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

The white looks a bit gray - lighten the parts of it not in shadow? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:54, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

The white looks fine to me, I think it might just be the shading that's making it look gray. 22:46, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

I think the white looks fine, in fact I can barely see any shading on the white, so darken or define it some 15:19, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Defined/darkened the shading and changed the tabby pattern a little bit.

Her belly looks grey 18:03, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Lightened the belly.

Lakeshine (Q) - For Approval
Wow, I'm pretty sure this is the hardest pattern I've tried to match yet. I don't even think I did that good of a job. Well, this is what I got so far. If you've got any suggestions on how to make it match better, I would love to hear it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:44, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Here's the changes if they aren't showing up. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:49, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Genius that I am, I forgot to supply a link to the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140710C/ezimba13931865175800.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:02, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Decided to work on it more. Much happier with it now, though it still doesn't match as much as I'd like. Any suggestions? Here are the links if it doesn't work: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140710C/ezimba13931841976300.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 23:37, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

make the markings look less like texture and more like mottles. 04:49, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

Alright. Any suggestions on how to do that? Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:03, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:36, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

make them smaller, and less blurred, and more smudged. 00:42, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think this works a lot better now, thank you. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:08, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Milkfur (RC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Beebs gave me the file. Everything is from the mc. <span style="">3:06 Thu Jul 10

Define the shading on the tabby places, and also on the tail. Wow, this is amazing..--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:07, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Breeze. ^-^ <span style="">17:36 Thu Jul 10

Blur the paw shading a bit more, perhaps? O.O pretty 00:01, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank youu. c: <span style="">0:33 Fri Jul 11

Blur the overall shading just a touch more. 02:34, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Dawnflower (Queen) ~ For Approval
She needed a Queen image. Color-picked from her Elder charart. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:46, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

don't darken but define the overall shading. 04:51, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

I think its fine. I can clearly see the shading as it is now. But if anyone else agrees, i will.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:13, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Duck, define the shading, please. Brick 06:15, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading some too? 13:04, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

And add a tiny bit of light on the back paw, perhaps? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:36, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

Really just blur the shading and maybe add a bit of depth to it- make it get gradually darker along the edges furthest from the light source, to make her have a 3D feel. :) 02:34, July 11, 2014 (UTC)