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Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink into the pelt, it looks like it cuts off very abruptly. 23:07, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

I think you could smooth out the shading on the main body and tail more. also, the shading is leaking on the legs. (Remember to blur the edges of the shading only so that it doesn't end up leaking)

The shading is leaking on the chest and where the tail-tip is over the body as well. Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 14:01, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Please reupload under File:Rockfall.star.png from now on, thank you. I've renamed it for you, but for future reference, please remember the naming guidelines that we have. They can be found above the reservation table on the main page.

Yep, I'm still working, I was out of town for a long time, so i had no accsess to my computer.

Reups.

The shading looks a little flat imo, and the fur needs to be smudged into the fur a bit. —   Fla      me    I can and I will  22:35, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Oops wrong file.Reuploaded.

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 23:53, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (Star) - For Approval
Bleh, I'll probably redo the shading later. Stoatskip (talk) 19:23, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, that's better. Stoatskip (talk) 20:14, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps try blurring the stipes? Nice. Misty~ (talk) 22:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

could you also add some depth to the shading on the main body? it looks a little flat. the eyes are beautiful, by the way! 22:36 Fri Nov 27

Thicken the stripes - they look way too thin.

Re-ups Thank you! Stoatskip (talk) 14:33, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think you still need to blur the stripes more. Misty~ (talk) 01:37, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes more tapered.

Re-ups I can't really blur them more than they are now. 15:52, November 29, 2015

You seem to know what you're doing and this looks more than 50% done so I am going to go ahead and promote you to an apprentice. 16:29, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail just a smidge? 23:05 Sun Nov 29

The stripes seem to be much darker on her other images. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 05:38, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Have you shaded the ear-pink and nose yet? If not, can you please do that? Thanks. If it's not compulsory, then my apologies Misty~ (talk) 05:54, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's not required, I don't think; I didn't do it on my earlier images. Anyway, maybe define the eye depth a little? 01:39, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

can you darken the stripes a little? I think they're darker on the others. 10:01, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to, but could you connect some of the stripes on their shoulder? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  10:10, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Oops, almost forgot I was working on this. 22:50, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes still look too thin, imo.

I think they're fine, some of them would start to blend if I made them thicker. 22:02, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Ok but I still don't think the stripe style on this matches her other images. They seem to be smudged, not blurred.

I'm sorry for contradicting what I said before, but I think the stripes on her other images are more defined and sharper. 01:51, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Also (sorry for commenting twice >-<) she has bright blue eyes. 01:56, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading a bit. 02:50 Fri Dec 11

Drizzle (ES) - For Approval
Love the name. Hate the texture though. Not sure it matches that well :/ 12:57, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you did pretty well matching it :) But the texture could stand to be lightened quite a bit, as it isn't that dark. Also the chest patch only goes down a little bit, and it's like a bib. 13:23, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the ear shading a tad? Looks very lovely :-) 02:58 Thu Dec 3 The white is to thick in my opinion, it looks like she has white streaked fur. --Belllastar (talk) 17:26, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just my screen, but I think the gray on the kit image might be a bit darker. 22:08, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 11:12, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I can get you the file from Storm if you need it Shinx? 13:43, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'd appreciate that :) 14:24, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

tbh it looks great without it. CBA? 10:02, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Even if it does it still has an outstanding comment. I sent shinx the file and they havent teuploaded yet. And besides if the light source is coming from where i think it is the whole top of the tail would be in light. This includes the base of the tail where theres a lot of shading 13:09, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I was waiting for another comment before I reuploaded, so that's why I didnt upload immediately after getting the file. 15:07, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Fair enough, Shinx. CBA?

Sorry for breaking your CBA, but I don't really think the texture matches. It seems thicker than on the kit. 22:43 Wed Dec 9

I think it matches just fine. The kit blanks are so small and this is a bigger blank for an adult cat, and tbh the texture won't match 100% 22:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

By "thicker" do you mean thicker lines or just more texture...? I'm confused 23:52, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine, and Winter is correct. The blank is much bigger than the kit... so I'm going to re-CBA this.

Actually, the texture seems to be over smudged and overly thick compared to the kit. It doesn't match. 11:28, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Harepounce (Star) ~ For Approval
First charart without using a tablet o.o Props to those of you who do this without one. PS, there are highlights. Let me know if I should turn them off^^ 23:23, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Wow, this is awesome! Could you smooth the shading on the ---> side of the tail? what's a tablet? 0:01 Sat Dec 5

I never use a tablet to make my images. Touchpad for life, yo. ^^ Smooth out the chest shading, if you don't mind?

reuploaded I did this with the touchpad and I'm still not entirely sure how I feel about it haha. Although this did make me start liking doing blurred shading a little more^^ 00:24, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Really I dont think the highlights or needed, this is beautiful! just a suggestion, i dont know how it would look without highlights since you make charart differently from what i do lol 00:32, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out overall just a little. 13:37, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded Let me know if it doesn't look like the changes are showing. 14:56, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should remove the highlights, as they are throwing off the color a bit. 15:37 Sun Dec 6

reuploaded Also fixed some blotchy shading that was soften by the highlights. 19:53, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen and lighten the shading.

reuploaded 19:01, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading to <== this side of the main body? It looks oddly bright.

reuploaded 17:24, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 01:12 Sun Dec 13

Fallowsong (Star) ~ For Approval
I love making StarClan eyes! Colors from the queen. 23:58 Fri Dec 4

Smooth out the overall shading, please.

Darken the shading a tad on the chest, it looks at bit lighter than the rest of the shading. It very well could be my monitor, since we all know how it likes to show things lighter than they are lol. 00:14, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The shading may need to be blurred more. 0:28 Sat Dec 5

Could be blurred a lot more. 00:51, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:50 Sat Dec 5

Re-uploaded Fiddled with tail shading. 17:44 Tue Dec 8

Comments? I'm allowed to ask after 3 days, right? <span style="">1:02 Sat Dec 12

Define the shading on the tail. Smooth it out more on the main body. 11:26, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">14:46 Sat Dec 12

Thistle (ES) - CBA
I never noticed how hard it was to match tabby images... Dangit. Anyways. Comments? 11:59, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  12:05, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think the whole of (our right) ear needs to be filled with earponk. While I'm here, in response to your message; I do have the file, and I'll happily send it to you! Sling me your email address and you'll find the file in your inbox by tomorrow. 02:01, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you~ 10:38, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks for the file! 13:30, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

wow gorgeous :O could you add some depth to the belly shading? <span style="">00:20 Tue Dec 8

Re-uploaded  Thanks! 12:05, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

It may be just me...but his back looks like it's covered in shadow...fix? Jaysnow (talk) 06:58, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  I meant for that to happen but oh well. Lowered the opacity 12:05, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

((bump))

Sorry for the lack of comments. CBA?

Beetle (DF) - Withdrawn
???? 21:09, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

his brown front paw should be black, the black on the tail should extend a bit further, and the far hind paw's black should be extended a little bit too. 21:12, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 01:07, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the dark patches some? <span style="">02:19 Sun Dec 6

They're not blurred they're smudged. 02:36, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge them more. Also, the texture is more.... Scribbly, to say. The texture here looks too straight. 02:44, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

I only said blur because the rogue's patches are softer. <span style="">18:53 Sun Dec 6

re-uploaded: Ok so I think I damaged this even more than it already is <_< 23:28, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Idk but the black splotches look like shading on the bottom

I still don't think the texture matches. Try repeatedly drawing on little "triangles" for the texture. I'm horrid at explaining... 11:45, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded: am cri 01:48, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the black more.

Re-uploaded: How do I charart 06:03, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

I still don;t think the texture matches. You should attempt to repeatedly draw on triangles (like strands of fur) instead of drawing it in straight lines. 09:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: This texture will be the death of me 12:27, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

The pupil seems to just kinda... blend in with the black. Could you reposition it?

reuploaded for Icy due to GIMP not working for her. <span style="">00:42 Sat Dec 12

Lighten and define the shading. 11:22, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? <span style="">14:47 Sat Dec 12

GIMP won't work. Whenever I start it it'll freeze and crash and no matter how many times I uninstall and reinstall it, it does the same thing. So I'm gonna withdraw, but if anyone has any suggestions to help me fix GIMP I would actually love you forever. 21:19, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Can i take over? 21:48, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Rooktail (StC) - For Evaluation
Hngghh this is really bad. —   <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">Fla      <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">me    <font color="#FF7F50">I can and I will  21:24, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define shading? Also, since this is your first charart, this needs to be titled 'For Evaluation' 22:55, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Um, I sort of lost the file because my power went out a few hours ago.. so I'll probably have to redo it. x.x —   <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">Fla      <font face="monotype corosiva" color="#C73F17">me    <font color="#FF7F50">I can and I will  01:01, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten him up a bit? I have to strain to see the lineart. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  10:08, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be lightened. I can see all the lineart just fine, and the shade matches the warrior. Maybe define the earpink a little bit though? 19:15, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

No I agree with finches. This needs to be lightened I cannot see the lineart anywhere but the head (even then hardly at all). Define the lightsource though. 18:29, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Seeing all of the lineart in all places is not mandatory. The darkness is fine, provided it matches his other image.

blur the shading. 02:55, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? <span style="">19:16 Sat Dec 12

Shivering Rose (Ki) ~ For Evaluation
First charart!! I made this in FireAlpaca. Comments? 21:11, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define highlights ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:31, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  21:37, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define nosepink because I can barely see it. Nice! 05:56, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

On a black cat, the nose "pink" is supposed to be black.

Lighten her up a bit; she looks almost pure black on my screen, which makes things seem lighter. Great job, especiall for a first. 06:17, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and smoothen the leg shading.

re-ups  23:40, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

She still needs to be lightened up, I can't make out the outline. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:59, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

As I've said before, seeing all of the lineart is not mandatory. As I can make out the lineart in places, I think it's fine. Could you define the light on the tail, though?

re-ups 00:19, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

The nosepink is still red. Change it to dark gray, please :-) <span style="">00:23 Wed Dec 9

Smooth the highlights a bit, they look hard-edged. I know, doing most anything with these blanks is a pain >.< 00:51, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 00:10, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

smoothen out the highlights 16:00, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you tell me how to do that? I'm not sure what that means ^^; 23:20, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Slash (DF) - CBA
11:26, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth.

reuploaded 18:25, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but I don't think the whole tail would be in light like that if the source is coming from the front 01:02, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

Shading depth should stand to be defined some more as well. 01:04, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

it only looks like its totally in light because of the lighter part, so no, I'm not changing it. I'll get to the depth soon, but don't ask me to do that again either. there's only so much depth it can have. .-. 05:12, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 07:28, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I know for a fact it should not be that light. The underbelly is an example of what the tail should look like, given your lightsource. Please change it 02:52, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

im not putting the entire thing in shadow, that just makes it look flat. >.> 05:17, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

i added a tiny strip of shading so now it has te exact same source as mapleshade so dont complain about it anymore, cuz i'm not changing it lmao ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 05:25, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 20:32, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Branch (Star) ~ CBA
Holy crap this is one of the hardest images I've ever had to match. Yes that is purple shading and yes it looks awesome. 01:39, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

reups Fixed a couple things 01:42, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

add/define the mottles. also i don't think this matches... 04:20, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

reups it does now 01:03, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 20:13, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Rainfur (TC) (Star) - For Approval
Tried some tinted shading, however if someone could give me advice on textures - the other chararts have them. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  22:04, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not very good at texture, so I can't really help you with that, but could you blur or smudge the shading more? <span style="">23:21 Tue Dec 8

Nice. Define the light in our right eye. 00:17, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading.

There's waste by her paws, and correct me if I'm mistaken, but shouldn't the shading on <-- leg be on the other side based on your light source? Very nice. 00:48, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading and I think there are some blurred lineart parts. Also can you add some depth to the eye? 06:06, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of shading leaking on her chin (sorry about being picky), and she needs more speckles. Nice! 08:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest turning your shading laer to multiply. You don't have to, but just thought Id suggest it. Would you like the file? 11:03, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Thanks for all the feedback! It's a nice welcome back! I've tried to complete all of the improvements tell me if I've missed anything. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  17:58, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading issues. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  18:02, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more 19:14, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and define the shading depth. <span style="">19:50 Wed Dec 9

REUPLOADED - Shading. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:51, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the shading could bee smoothed out or smudged more, depending on what you did.

Try lightening the opacity. 00:23, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be a really dark tail-tip like that? 01:10, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I still think she needs more speckles, perhaps check the warrior/queen image for some reference? 11:55, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading should be smoothed out and lightened. Then brightened and applied more speckles. Also, I've made the texture more apparent. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:13, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on <== that front paw? 22:17, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out and lighten it on the head. 11:30, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading should be better. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:58, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading on --> this ear? The earpink color kinda disappears in the shading. <span style="">02:34 Sun Dec 13

Littlekit (Ki) - For Approval
tiny baby

Re-uploaded. Was asked to do some things.

I asked you to define the shading and it llooks good. Can you maybe just smooth out the shading in general? What I mean is like blur it some more, but I know you don't blur so like just making it more smoother.

Re-uploaded. I have too many shading layers. =/

* Facepalm* Sorry for messing it up over here, i always manage to do that XD 04:28, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out on the main body. 11:29, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Honey Pelt (K) - For Approval
05:05, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I fixed the duplicate images for you! Can you blur the shading on the legs and chest a little bit? Super cute! 05:37, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are slightly thicker on his ES^^

The ES has texture, I think, so this should as well. 01:15, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading depth? Cutee! <span style="">02:46 Fri Dec 11

Reups Thanks <3! Also, ty Ivystripe, i didn't even know this went through cause my computer wasn't registering it, i tried to post it twice so that explains the duplication. x3 04:27, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on her neck and body and define it on the tail. 11:20, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Littlestep (Star) - For Approval
i'm wayyy up i feel blessed <span style="">02:43 Fri Dec 11

idk if you know, but the colors for this are pure black and pure white. I doubt you need the file, but feel free to ask me for it if you need it.

Yep, Winter told me they were pure black and pure white, so that's what was used :-) <span style="">18:31 Sat Dec 12