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Ashfoot  (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 16:39, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

Wow this is really nice! Define shading on the ear pink. -- 16:59, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 17:02, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

define the light on the tail. 17:41, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:02, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a tad; the depth is perfect and so is the darkness, but the ends of it stop a tiny bit abruptly.

Reuploaded. 16:01, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
Took colors from her deputy file

Define earpink shading -- 23:13, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

What's with her nose? Her nose colour looks different from her ear colour. Neon Skylite, the best person on the third rock from Sol! 06:30, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Certainly looks the same to me; there's also no rule stating that ear pink and nosepink must match in coloring.

Reuploaded Played around with the shading on the right ear, but on the left one the light source doesn't have any shading on it so I didn't do anything. Nose color does match earpink -- I checked.

Give a bit of depth to the shading, and I'm not sure if it's light or just an accident, but there appears to be a light speck on --> back paw.

Reuploaded Added depth and defined the light that's on the back paw since it was weird before

Define the shading on the head and neck just a touch? 14:27, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Smooth out the shading a bit, it looks a little rough to me. --

Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" 00:08, August 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Squirrelwhisker (Q) - For Approval
This was a pain to shade. 20:44 Wed Aug 10

I shall put you to torture. Make the shading darker! Darker, darker darker! Alright, sorry for talking like a person in the middle ages leading a witch mob. Make the shading darker. I can't see it very well. Neon Skylite, the best person on the third rock from Sol! 21:18, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

it only really needs definition on the tail and (maybe) belly. 22:22, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

Would you like the file? 23:10, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

I think face shading could be defined more too? --  23:14, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

If it is a PSD (can only open SAI and PSD files) I would very much appreciate it, Bluestar. I need the base colors as I am sure I messed them up. ^.^; And I am working out the shading. This is just a very weird image to shade without highlights 'cause it is so dark. 23:24 Wed Aug 10

Unfortunately, I only have xcf files; however, I could tell you the color ID's for each part, as well as the opacity I used for each layer, if that would help. 23:44, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

It would, thanks! 01:52 Thu Aug 11

Smudge the stripes? They look solid to me.

I'm pretty confident they are actually meant to be this solid from what I can tell with the other 2 images on her page. (Although this is actually quite a bit more solid than I am used to) 02:52 Thu Aug 11

No, the stripes are not smudged (at least on the warrior). 03:08, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you Bluestar for the colors ^.^ 23:39 Fri Aug 12

Doestar (D) ~ For Approval
22:17, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on back and light source. -- 23:12, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

the light source is fine, I've used it on another deputy. ._. 23:25, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the facial shading, if there's meant to be shading on the face? My laptop isn't showing it all too well.

Soften the white to brown transition a bit 02:07, August 11, 2016 (UTC) Reposition the eye,

Doestar looks like she's looking backwards! Neon Skylite, the best person on the third rock from Sol! 06:29, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded it's almost like eyes can look backwards... 06:47, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I still think the pupil is backwards. Turn her pupil to the other side of her eye! Neon Skylite, the best person on the third rock from Sol! 08:29, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

I'm not doing it. There's no one position the eye has to be in. 08:33, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Neon, eye style is artist's choice. He's not required to change it unless a cat looks cross-eyed, which is impossible in this case due to there only being one visible eye.

reuploaded fixed a couple things that were bothering me 08:48, August 12, 2016 (UTC)

Shellheart (D) ~ For Evaluation
-- 23:11, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink is quite a bit neon-ish -- would you mind trying to match it to the other images? Also there's random white pixels floating throughout the image. Eye depth needs to be defined also b/c I can't see any

Smooth out the shading on the main body and tail. 14:29, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Fixed -- 17:27, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink a bit more, and try and make the shading look like it's separate from the image. As it is now, it looks like it's taking the pattern and... absorbing it, for lack of a better word. You should be able to see the pattern through the shading, but I can't with this.

Fixed This probably looks worse than before; #1 reason why I wish Pixlr had Gaussian Blur :/ ;( -- 23:54, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Shelly's ears still look a bit off. Change the colour, maybe? --

Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" 05:47, August 12, 2016 (UTC)

Fixed -- 14:57, August 12, 2016 (UTC)

It seems that you've colored over the lineart on the --> front paw and it also looks slightly blurred on the back two paws. Also, can you smooth out the shading on the very front paw? It looks like straight brush stroke on my screen. The shading is also leaking away from the lineart on the heels of both back paws, on the back, top of the tail, and the eartips.

Fixed -- 17:13, August 13, 2016 (UTC)

Actually, the lineart is still being colored over by a few pixels on the fromt paw furthest away from us. On that paw, there doesn't seem to be any shading or patterning. The shading is still leaking on the backs of both heels, on the back, the eartips, and at the top of the tail. The eye color is also much darker than the other images, so could you perhaps color pick it to align?

Fixed --  17:27, August 14, 2016 (UTC)

Tornear (A) ~ For Approval
I tried...and failed 11:51, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

maybe lighten the shading just a bit? 18:17, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

I agree with Sky. Tornear looks too dark! -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" 22:01, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 10:19, August 12, 2016 (UTC)

Fallowsong (Ki) - For Approval
14:15, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit, please?

Re-uploaded. I cannot get the shading to cooperate on this image, is this any better? 17:49, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Eaglestorm (W) - For Approval
And since there's no shade specified, I get to pick.

He looks a little too dark. Lighter please? -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" 22:03, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Vicky never specified a shade, so I think he looks fine. Just maybe define the light on the tail

Re-uploaded. If a shade isn't specified, it's technically artist's choice.

Mudclaw (WC) (Apprentice) ~ For Approval
10:54 Sun Aug 14

Add/define mottles. 13:42, August 14, 2016 (UTC)