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Storm (Ro) (Ki) - For Approval
This probably doesn't match well. 19:47, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, shading depth, and smooth the shading a bit.

Reuploaded 20:09, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It might just be me but she looks tinted yellow compared to the other images. 20:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

^^I see the yellow tint too.

Reuploaded I put a shading tint on the image. (if that's what you're talking about) Sorry, I should have said something about that. 21:14, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on her other images seem more... Clustered, for the lack of a better word. If you'd like, I can try and dig up the file for the ES. (Though my attempt at matching her pattern is pretty bad hh)

In between the thick tail stripes should be very thin, hardly noticeable stripes, i think.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better. :) And Fox, you don't have to dig the file out, you probably have so many other files and my computer doesn't load email anyway. 01:51, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the face and chest? Also, do you think you could curve the neck shading rather than having it be sort of a straight line, if that makes sense? 01:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

awww she's so cute (he?) ((: a suggestion is maybe u could extend the stripes to the empty area on the right hand side? cuz there should be stripes on her haunch area. 04:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Gah this is so hard to explain *.* but I feel like the stripes on her other images aren't as... Messy? Like they seem to form a more orderly pattern, if you get me. There also appears to be texture on her other images, so that also needs to be added.

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt. :) Hopefully this is close to what you meant, Fox. :D 00:35, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 23:36, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:45, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and smooth the bit of shading on the flank thing next to the -> arm

Reuploaded 21:55, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading between the front legs. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:59, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:27, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the <- arm and smooth it out a little?

Reuploaded  17:10, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more on the neck and face. 23:50, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:35, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes there 08:52, 7/30/2017

Reuploaded :) 20:16, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear to be a bit softer on the other images, also perhaps define the stripes under the shading? + smooth the shading on the ear

Reuploaded 18:17, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

Deerdapple (Star) ~ For Approval
Sorry for the late upload, got punished. Also, one sec for me to upload mine. 03:15, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:16, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

The colors don't match, would you like the elder file? Other than that, define the shading.

Smudge the ear pink a bit and I think the stripes are thicker on the other images. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:26, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm fine, thanks anyways Danny, :) 03:37, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any texture on the pale areas, define the eye depth, smudge the stripes, theres waste by the <-- elbow, define the shading depth, smooth the shading and highlights.

There is also waste above the back. Good luck with this image.

Reuploaded I'll need it. RIP 03:51, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on his other images seem to have more of a jagged look, if you get what I mean. The stripes here also kind of fade off a the they look blue at at least one of the ends. The eyes are very pretty on this, Pepper. :) 03:55, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you Shypaw. :) 04:04, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes.

Smooth the shading on chest and -> paw

Reuploaded 21:52, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Is that shading or texture on the muzzle? Because the muzzle and around the eyes include the pale non-textures parts (If it's shading, ignore this lol)

It's shading. lmao 22:14, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on the other images appear to be more messily smudged.

Reuploaded I tried. 23:27, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the > ear just a little? This looks really pretty.

Reuploaded Thank you Spooky! ^^ 23:50, August 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think the stripes could still be sharpened to match the other images. On the elder, from what I can see the stripes were made with a solid pixel brush and then smudged with a 1px or 2px brush.

Reuploaded I redid the stripes, is it better? 01:07, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the stripes are much thicker also. Maybe smooth out some shading on the forehead. Good job so far! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:18, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:43, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the back and --> shoulder. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:34, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

There appears to be a random dark spots on the <- paw, I can redline if you need it

Reuploaded I spent 10 mins seeing what layer that dark spot was on. xD 15:10, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

Wow, pepper this is amazing! Can you add some depth on the base of the chest by the elbows? 19:46, 8/02/2017

Reuploaded Thank you!! ^^ 19:59, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

The farthest forehead stripe needs to go down further

Reuploaded 23:06, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on the other images still seem more messily smudged; the stripes here are a lot softer, I guess? I dunno it's hard to explain

I wouldn't really say messily smudged, but if that's how you describe it... I would say they seem kinda wavy? I feel like Sorrel might have initially used a hard-edged brush with a size one pixel range to get the effect she got. After looking at it for a while.... I mean, matching stripes 100% is pretty difficult, but you had the right idea with the stripes on this version. These are a bit too soft.

Reuploaded 14:03, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Snake (DotC) (Alt. ES) - For Approval
He was cited as gray in the alleg. of Blazing Star when he was in Clear Sky's group, so I'm like 90% sure that means he gets an alt. es. Also, there's very faint texture because after zooming in on the alt. rogue, you can just barely see texture.

I think there's some shading leaking on the booty from the tail shading. Pretty image! 00:10, August 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups Thank you :^>

Im so jealous x.x These blanks are the best. Think you could define the eye depth just a smidge? 18:29, 8/01/2017

reups Too bad the only other ES chararts we'll likely get are more alts. They're in Clans now, so warrior blanks it is. (also fixed some leaky shading)

Define the shading on all legs? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:18, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

reups I tried to define the shading on just the legs but it was already solid black with a low layer opacity so I just made it even darker black and darkened the entire layer :^)))))

Shattered Ice (Alt. ES) - For Approval
This is an alt for being called silver. It was originally done on a rogue blank, and I suppose we forgot to switch it when we gave the early settlers their own blank. 21:48, August 1, 2017 (UTC)

Where do you find these alts. ;0; Define the shading depth, especially on the nearest back leg and tail. 21:50, August 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste around the ears

Re-uploaded. Is this any better on the shading? Also, I don't actually find a lot of alts at all (this only like the third one I've ever done), I just noticed this while I was writing part of his article. 22:13, August 1, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the shading that isn't the darkest part of the shading if that makes any sense? 19:21, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

^^^I believe another way to put it would be define the shading, but the shading depth is fine, so just the shading???

Re-uploaded. Nah, I think I know what Skt meant, but I'm not sure if I fixed it well enough, though. 20:17, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the farthest front leg and on the haunch?

Re-uploaded. 12:58, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit more on the haunch/belly/front leg area? Unless that's intentional. If you're going for that look, disregard me. I've been awake way too long.

Nightheart (Ro) ~ For Approval
03:49, 8/03/2017

Where in the cite does that confirm that it's Nightheart?

In the bonus scene with Petal and Fox she said that she had to help nightheart and leaf take a squirrel from a black tom (moon shadow), which we see in the sun trail, which is the exact scene playing out. 04:31, 8/03/2017

The scenes in the Bonus Section of The Sun Trail match up with the events from the book. I double-checked myself, and there's too many things that match up, including Petal outright saying that Nightheart and Leaf were the ones who jumped on Moon Shadow (the black tom hunting the squirrel) and it was already confirmed that the cat that Gray Wing and Clear Sky met (the black she-cat) is Nightheart. Connecting the separate stories shows one giant event, basically. You need to actually read the books and put two and two together. The events are described by Petal exactly as they happened in both The Sun Trail and the Bonus Scene.

Spider Paw (Alt W) ~ For Approval
i didnt even know i could charart with ibis paint, but um...here? if it screwed up the page somehow, just decline it. this is honestly just a test. <span style="">23:18, 8/03/2017

reuploaded. waste <span style="">23:40, 8/03/2017

Maybe lighten the shading a little, and make it so that this represents his design in the manga? (http://vvcap.com/B9zr4RVvk23) Also define the ear pink

im trying <span style="">23:53, 8/03/2017

I think the base color should be light and the pale parts should be white as they were on the es, but you'll probably want a second opinion or something.

just a test, so im withdrawing. going to do mistlekit <span style="">00:20, 8/04/2017

I would like to take over. 01:30, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

good luck <span style="">01:31, 8/04/2017

Re-uploaded: ... thanks? 03:05, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think his tail is white in the manga.

no, its not <span style="">04:27, 8/04/2017

Define the light on the legs a bit? 17:46, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Bee (Ki) ~ For Approval
I hope I got the stripes right. Shading may seem dark? I don't know. I'm proud of this tbh. Bee bee buzz buzz. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:14, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes seem more pixely/sharp on the other images

Wow this is super cute c: the yellow looks a little too dull, and the stripes on the legs should be more horizontal. Also, you put the wrong date on the chart when you reserved this

Sweetpaw (Alt. App.) - For Approval
It looked better without a white. Anyways: My first tortoiseshell. There is black spread throughout the image, it just looks overshadow with the brown base, ginger, shading, and smudging. Please don't make me brighten the white that's under the shading, then it might look like it's too bright and not under shading at all, but I won't complain or force you not to. Ummm that's all (also thanks David for telling me what to include) :). Oh! Wait. The tail shading looks really sharp but it isn't, it just clashes with the placement of the black and the smudging. TBH all the shading looks really sharp due to the placement of the highs and how much is going on, I swear. 04:50, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink a little? This color blends a little with the base.

I think the shading might have been covering it. Reuploaded 05:15, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Yes, I know the tail shading is horrible. I'll redo it later.

DOesn't she need texture, or does she not because she's a altErmineGlow (talk) 16:01, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

I think that since this is based off the manga, it shouldn't have texture. Although I'm not sure.

Can you recede the shading on the chest, then a little on the haunch? I just feel like it covers a bit too much with this source. I also think the shading needs to be smoothed out in order to add more depth :)

The farther front paw needs to be white, as shown in the manga. <span style="">16:38 Fri Aug 4

re-up Nope. Nope nope nope.

The shading it leaking a bit on the haunch and on the closest back leg. 17:48, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading to give it more of a gradient-style look. Unless you're going for a smudged look? Which in that case, you should probably have smudged all of the shading, not just the edges. It cuts off a bit too abruptly and then changes to an all block-y look.

Mistlekit (CJ) (Alt K) ~ For Approval
for being called gray

define the head shading a bit <span style="">16:53, 8/04/2017

Reuploaded

Expand and smooth out the shading along the -> side of the blank.

Honey Pelt (Alt W) ~ For Approval
how do you even short-hair <span style="">16:52, 8/04/2017

I'm asking the exact same question. XD Smooth and lighten shading.

re-uploaded. working on tail shading and whatever, dont comment on it please. <span style="">17:30, 8/04/2017

reuploaded. the tail shading is disgusting, but i can actuallly charart from the mobile <span style="">17:47, 8/04/2017

Smooth out the shading and darken the tint. I feel your color choice clashes with the gray a bit too much.