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Cloudberry (TC) (Medicine) ~ For Approval
I tried. Estimate, please, I want to be useful. I made "fur" light and shade. I took a flattened muzzle at Yellowfang. ✨ShineStar✨ 09:52, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but you need to reserve this on the reservation table on the main page first. Everything that gets posted here should be reserved first. Until then, I'll need to decline this image. Feel free to repost (after this has been archived and you've properly reserved the image). If you don't know how to do so, please ask, and one of us will be able to help you. =D

How to make it? ✨ShineStar✨ 10:54, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I make it! ✨ShineStar✨ 11:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading? Nice <3 01:55, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yes :) It is pleasant to you? It is possible to add? ✨ShineStar✨ 08:13, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I made shadows shorter. ✨ShineStar✨ 08:17, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs a little bit? I'm glad to see you found out how to reserve the image. =)

Can you smooth out the shading a tad? Also, this file needs to be re-named Cloudberry (TC).mc.png 14:25, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I completely changed a treatment of light and shade and I changed the name. ✨ShineStar✨ 11:43, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights some. 16:00, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean and how to make it? ✨ShineStar✨ 08:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

New version! I made (sorry, my english is bad =) ) texture of long fur. ✨ShineStar✨ 16:32, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading more please 16:34, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Since you had asked for like, an explanation: do you see how on the other images on here, the shading is super smooth (for lack a better word) and you can't really see the transition from base color to shading? It's just shading? Blur the shading so it's like that. Also: your English is perfectly fine, don't worry. 21:07, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

I washed away as much as possible. I tried in the Gimp. Also, i ise Translate. ✨ShineStar✨ 09:17, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading? It seems like it was just paint-brushed onto her in big grey blobs. If you want some help with this, you are always welcome to ask a member =) 10:03, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The transition from pelt colour to shading's a bit abrupt, you should blur it some. Gaussian Blur helps a lot :3 Also, the shading on the legs should be a little more, uh, defined. :3 13:26, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

I done. ✨ShineStar✨ 07:09, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

How? ✨ShineStar✨ 07:45, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail, please. Nice job. 14:07, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Eep, this is turning out beautiful. Define shading on the legs and tail as BC said, and on the head. This is great :D 03:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Please try not to repeat comments autumnbright. 14:55, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

I done? ✨ShineStar✨ 12:37, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the legs 04:17, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yesss ✨ShineStar✨ 09:32, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

I done? ✨ShineStar✨ 15:55, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the tail and define the shading on the front leg facing us? Looking great! --ZootVine (talk) 00:57, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen main body shading~ ^.^ 01:28, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the face is a little too flat, maybe bring it back out a pixel? Also, make sure the lineart around the face is two pixels thick. 22:59, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

Rrrrr ✨ShineStar✨ 09:29, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

The file needs to be renamed as File:Cloudberry (TC).mc.png 22:35, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

But, HOW? <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 16:21, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

I renamed it for you. You'll now need to upload under that file instead of the one you were using.

Done? <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 08:59, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry but I still can't see shading that well on this <-- leg. Define shading there, and define light source on the legs furthest from us, please. 10:36, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know if I'm allowed to do this but are you still working on Cloudy? uwu

Autumn, only leads can ask that =P 00:01, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry XD

Still working? 01:27, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Pearnose (Star) ~ For Approval
I miss blurring I'll smooth out chest shading and perhaps thicken the dorsal stripe in the next upload if there's going to be one. don't tell me they don't match cuz I'll agree with it

Darken the stripes? 13:18, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs? 14:36, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry but this is a biiiiit too red to be dark brown 23:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Italicizing and repeating letter isn't gonna get your point across. Can you make the earpink a more dull color? 03:48, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

...I highly doubt that was Winter's intention. Define the shading on the belly region, please. 16:59, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

In a moment^^ I colorpicked off her med version and used highlights but I didn't on the legs and tail, so I guess I'll take out the highlights when I get GIMP. I think that'll solve the problems

re-ups

re-ups forgot dorsal stripe!

Define the shading on the tail. 17:28, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups shorthair tails!

CBA? 01:27, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

im gonna be thatperson but this sint dark brown, plus i can still barely see the shading. 19:14, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups How many times do I need to say I colorpicked from the med?? This is already a slight darker than the med, mind you. I can see the shading fine, but I still darkened it.

Re-CBA? 20:13, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

then nominate the damn thing for another tweak. its not dark enough. and the stripes are blending into the shading. 00:14, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's dark enough, personally. 02:43, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups So you're saying the StarClan version and med version shouldn't match? Sure.

Can you put the shading layer on multiply? I can't see the stripes through it and I can barely see the shading. <span style="">18:15 Sat Sep 26

Still working? 01:28, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Holy macaronie crap I forgot about this!!! e.e

Rabbitleap (W) ~For Approval
Here it is, finally finished!

Please don't align your images. Also, define the shading. 03:33, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

I was just about to do that xD

Reuploaded. Here.

I saw some waste.

Smudge/blur the earpink a bit, and make it a bit less bright. Also, smoothen out your highlights :] <span style="">03:54 Sun Sep 13

He needs to match this image http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/5/5f/Rabbitleap_%28TC%29.kit.png/revision/latest?cb=20150912210231 If not already matched. Ignores this if its invalid. --Dewsplash (talk) 03:58, September 13, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash 03:58, September, 13, 2015

Reuploaded.

Blur the ear pink 06:12, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading everywhere but the legs. Define the light on the legs. 12:26, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more. 17:07, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So beautiful.

Reuploaded again. Ugly earpink :P

Nice job! Can you blur the shading and highlights some more, and can you possibly dull the earpink to a paler color other than the bright pink it is now? If you need some more help, you can color pick from actual images of brown cats. 22:56, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm sorry if its not that pale.

Dull and blur the ear pink and smooth out the shading on the haunch; it's a bit blotchy 04:23, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the earpink a bit more pale. Also what tool do i use to smoothen out the shading. (I use pixlr btw)

If you decide to rejoin the project, I'll add you in as an apprentice. And as for the image, smooth out the shading 10:14, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink looks kinda neon, can you dull it down a bit? #ab4526 is a good color, I'd suggest you use that, but you don't have to. Just dull it down more, if you want. 10:26, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also, may I rejoin the project as an apprentice?

Smooth out the shading and blur the earpink? Also, remember to add a timestamp with your signature. 20:25:17 16 Sep 2015 (UTC)

How do I smoothen out the shading? PoppyShine 20:40, September 16, 2015

It looks to me like the shading is a lot redder than the main pelt. Maybe match it more? 15:02, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

To smooth out the shading, just blur it until it blends with the pelt more. 07:15, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you use a duller hue for your earpink, and smudge it more? You should reshape it a little, too - you should make it more, um, triangular? XD 08:32, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define shading on the front leg closest to us 08:32, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Does this look better? Reuploaded.

Reuploaded. Made it look better.

Blur the shading just a tiny bit more? 01:18, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Match the colour on the | approved kit image, please. The earpink and eye colour are both incorrect. ~ Also, please blur earpink a bit more, and dull shading, esp on the main body. It's a tad too red 10:49, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the legs could use a little definiton + tail needs smoothening, too. Sorry for the deluge of comments haha ^.^ 10:51, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

The shading still seems a bit too red, and I think it's leaking a little along the back. 02:39, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with BC. Define shading on the legs as well? 03:28, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Should i lighten the shading or darken the shading?

Blur it, please and add depth 23:24, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Choose a duller hue for the shading. It really has nothing to do with how light or dark the shading is imo :3 01:20, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest putting the shading layer mode onto Multiply, but you don't have to. 02:19, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry I have a lot of school work to do, so I cant really work on it that much.

I think the shading is leaking along the back. 16:24, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Rockfall (W) ~ For Approval
Okay, this is my first time doing a CA, so someone please give me some tips on what to do. :/

Ebs

Please dont align your images, and  blur the aerpink andwell as define the light on the back legs 03:00, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, this is pretty good! Define the neck shading? 04:07, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch a bit. 12:03, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Wait, how do I not align an image Ebs

In source mode, delete the little part that says left or right in the image coding. i just did it for you :] Smooth out the back and leg shading a little more. <span style="">02:12 Tue Sep 15

Add or define the neck shading ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:14, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and add/define head shading. 20:27:59 16 Sep 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Wow, my PC glitched so i probs messed something up :( This better? Urk, positioning.... how can I fix it? Ebony Huo

Blur the earpink a tad more, and the neck shading still isn't that visible. Please lighten midriff shading too (ah deja vu) 08:29, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail and main body and define the light on the back legs. 20:50, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Yo this okay? Ebs

Wait no it's not updating my pictures...... I'll try on another computer. Ebs

This needs to be named File:Rockfall.warrior.png. Please reupload over that file, not the one you're currently using.

Would you mind smoothing the area in the middle of the hind-quarter? It's either light or shading, it looks a little blotchy. 21:37, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Okay, I tried again.... Ebs

Lovely! Blur the shading a tad more :] <span style="">01:05 Tue Sep 22

Define neck shading a bit more? 01:25, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped when you can't do neck shading rip Ebs

Define the neck shading just a tad and the light on the haunch. Please don't align your images. Also, this should be named as File:Rockfall.warrior.png.

Yooo Rockfall looks like grey matte XD Lighten the base a little? His apprentice pixel's a lighter grey than this. 13:36, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

This image came first. The apprentice should match this 05:13, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

The apprentice pixel's already approved, though. Does that mean it needs to be tweaked/redone? Also, I still think that neck shading can be defined a tad. 10:06, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, I think the one that gets posted first is the one everyone else has to match, unless it's declined. 14:40, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 02:55, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

It would actually just be easier and a bit more fair to match the apprentice- it did get approved first, after all. It's only a shade or two, at the most, and doesn't make any difference. It's not like it's a pelt texture or tabby style or something along those lines. It would be an unnecessary tweak just for a tick or two on the shade line.

I did get all the colours from this image though when i was making the apprentice. It should be the same shade if im not wrong, unless they changed it for some reason. 20:50, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ah, frick. I think I'll just withdraw this one because I literally have no time for it. Also, I think you got the colors from the warrior's highlights, which I deleted later on. I'll withdraw this because of no time :/ Ebs

oi Ill take over then 02:24, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

re-up ill get the shading so don't bother commenting that <3 All colors from apprentice 02:55, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define/add muzzle shading? Unless that's part of what you'll do when you get the shading. 03:06, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

re-up there is no need for muzzle shading since the lighting is hitting directly on the muzzle. so bad at shading, i need to learn how to blur... 03:14, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth / blur the shading some more? 04:24, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink more, not in color but in how blurry it is.

Re-up The ear pink is fine. Does that shading look a bit over-blurred or naw 20:20, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Early Settler blanks ~ For Approval
thanks 2 the gays that uploaded for me :* i know they're way too big but can someone like recommend a way to make them smaller that doesn't pixelate them?? ty <span style="">14:11 Wed Sep 16

Maybe make the long-haired's tail a bit fluffier? These are so awesome! 14:35, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding some tufts of fur to the back of the front legs/elbows on the longfurred. Cats normally have longer fur there regardless, but it would be even more prominent on a long furred cat. Also, try to make the tails a tad more.. rounded and soft?? It has a few sharp edges here and there, so if you could soften that it would be great. You did wonderfully on these! 16:22, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

For the back legs, do you mind trying to make the femur...protude, a little, if you get what I mean? if you don't feel free to ask - sorry, my brain is fried. 17:42, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you fix the paws, they look a bit off 18:00, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the image smaller? 20:04, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know of any way to make them smaller without pixelating them - just make them smaller, use whatever tool on whatever program you have to harden the lines, if possible, and if that makes sense, and then go in manually and make sure the whole lineart is two pixels wide. Definitely make the long-haired tail way, way fluffier, as well as the cheeks, neck fur, and belly fur, look at the queen blank to see what I'm talking about. The far back leg (behind the cat) is bent way too sharply, and the toes should be facing straight to the right, not turned towards us. The paw on the back leg closest to us looks like it's lifted in the air, and that wouldn't work since the front leg on the same side is definitely lifted in the air, the cat wouldn't be able to balance like that; flatten that paw so it looks like it's set firmly against the ground. The lifted front leg, the paw looks like it has too many joints - either get rid of that bend just above the paw and have it held straight up with the toes held out forward, or bend the paw back. Also, your perspective seems off; the far front leg is much longer than both back legs. Make sure the paws on the same side of the body is even with each other on the ground. I apologize for the wall of text. I was trying to be as specific as I could. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:32, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

The tail looks a tad uneven- it looks a bit... Bumpy in some places? 02:30, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

The paws look a little thick too me idk 15:07, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Cats aren't that ... for lack of better words, "skinny". Skinny enough that you can see their bones. It seems like in this case the point is to see the muscles and bones, and I don't think they should be seen. However feel free to disagree with that. 23:09, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Here's a friendly reminder to not forget to re-upload! 06:53, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. bullied david into uploading them for me ( thanks nerd ) anyways i kind of butchered them while resizing i m sorry. also, superfluff. <span style="">11:20 Mon Sep 21

Ok so there seems to be a little too much fluff on the long haired kitties. For all four paws can you make the lineart smoother? And where the femur protrudes, the lineart should be smooth there as well. 11:36, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

On the contrary, I think there's too many little lines of scruff, if that makes sense, but not not enough fluffiness. Thicken the neck and cheek fur a lot, again, look at the queen blank to see the kind of thickness I mean, and make the tail a lot bigger and fluffier. Make the lifted front paw much thinner, and maybe just make it one toe facing us instead of both, that makes more sense anatomically. Also, get rid of the little toe thing on the closest back leg to us, those only go on the insides of a cat's leg, not the outside, and also cats only have them on the front legs. Nice update. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 12:17, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the head slightly? 01:45, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the leg that's lifted is a little too curved. 22:48, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reminder to not forget to re-upload! 05:12, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Its only been four days since the last reupload, Fox. I'm pretty sure Berry is allowed extended time to reupload considering blanks are more time consuming than an ordinary charart image. 05:41, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I know, but I don't think it'd hurt to remind her or something. 07:31, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

shes not always on a computer, she'll get to them when she can. also, with the front leg toe thing, maybe shift them up some? 12:12, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the heels less "poked upwards"? my horrible explaining

re-uploaded. thanks 2 david again <span style="">12:06 Mon Sep 28

Femur still protrudes - mind fixing that? 18:29, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

The leg in the back farthest from us looks like it's lifted, which would mean the cat is balancing on two legs. Is that intended? 20:14, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think the heel should be at a softer angle(aka less 90 degree-ish). The cat would break its leg like that. 23:59, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think Berry had actually said on Skype that she used a picture of Bella, her cat, for the reference for the feet? I don't think it's bad, especially if she used a reference picture, and there's no better one than one of your own cat. Plus, we all know cats are weird and have their own logic when it comes to anatomy and all of that. I've seen cats in pretty weird and bizarre positions.

Heronwing (TC) (K) ~ CBA
All colors from the warrior. 15:57, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading? 16:31, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

The shading appears flat overall. Define it please 18:27, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  22:37, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blue the shading on the tail? 20:49, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  01:10, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's some shadey waste below the tail XD 01:40, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  03:09, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the stripes? 18:56, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes aren't all that visible on the warrior, either. If someone else thinks they should be darker too I'll define them. 19:53, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I have to agree with Autumn. The stripes sort of get lost in the shading, I can't really see them in shaded areas. Also, define the tail shading. 21:14, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups How's that? 23:55, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the stripes get lost in the shading 01:56, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Darkened stripes. 02:35, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste blow the tail 01:26, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  23:06, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

I can't really see the stripes on the tail

Reuploaded  19:50, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Just saw that waste. I'll fix it soon. 19:51, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded No more waste! 00:10, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 02:53, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dawn Mist (Ro) - For Approval
Ack, this one was a pain to try and match properly. Thanks to Fox for sending me the file. I tried, I really did. It was tough trying to match the white patterns from the angle it was at, and trying to get the colors and the texture right. I'm reasonably happy with the end result. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:59, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

There is texture on the white. Define it please? 06:09, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the main pelt is a little redder on the queen. Nice job! 14:30, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the tail, feet, and legs? 15:24, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

I took the main pelt color right from the file Fox sent me. But I think there's something weird going on with the layers; the ear pink looked like a different color every time I made a new layer visible or non-visible, and the color I color-picked from the shading layer looks totally different from how the shading looks on the cat. Fox, how do your layers work? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:33, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think some of the layers are set into "multiply", which makes the color look a little different. But I don't know why the ear pink is acting weird thou... 23:25, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

What does "multiply" mean in regard to layers? Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:27, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

It meaans to take the value of the color from the layer above and the layer below, add them together and multiply them. It usually results in a darker color and the advantage is once you get rid of a background, there will be absolutely no waste, since no color = 0 value. It typically blends the colors together better as well. 23:38, September 19, 2015 (UTC)

What does that mean, the value of the color, adding and multiplying them? So you mean the actual colors I'm grabbing from the layers aren't what they appear as on the final product? Yikes. I dunno how I'm gonna make the colors look accurate to the final product, then, if I can't just just color-grab straight from the layers. I guess I'll just grab bits and pieces of color from the final queen image. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:48, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Just set the layer mode to multiply. Which program are you using? 03:58, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know how to do that. ArtStudio, it's an app on my iPad. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:13, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

If you use ArtStudio, there is a box that shows you all your layers. When you select a layer, there will be a box on the very top of the window that says "Normal", that is the current layer mode. Tap that, and it'll show up a window where you can select your layer modes. I hope this helped ^^ 04:25, September 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shoulder shading line less... "edgy"? ...Like softening it? holy crap my explanations

Reuploaded. I tried. I'll soften the shoulder shading on the next update. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:10, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

As the OA I can tell you that I think there's got to be more orange on the top of her shoulder. Beautiful ^^ 02:34, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad overall, looking great! 01:29, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 01:29, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (Ro) ~ For approval
My First Tabby I know its not as good as winterflurrys infact its not good at all, but please be nice. Belllastar (talk) 00:47, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Nice job! The stripes are thinner on the kit, could you make them thinner? 00:53, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Adding to what was said above the main base color seemed more pale and the stripes could be more defined and darker and please don't align your images.--Dewsplash (talk) 01:05, September 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:05, September, 21, 2015

Reups fixed shadeing just saw comments Belllastar (talk) 01:38, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

The tabby pattern looks a bit overblurred and the stripes are a little paintbrushy; sharpen the pattern 01:57, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading as well. 21:09, September 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail 20:10, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 01:55, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I dont know if I can, no matter how hard I try I cant ger the stipes right, I know I need the smudge them but its realy hard would it be within the rules tho have someone smudge the stripes for me I have a Non blured/smudged version. Belllastar (talk) 14:31, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

If you can't fix them, I would recommend completely re-doing the stripes with the Pencil tool at 1px instead. What program do you use? -- 15:21, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Pixlr and/or sumopaint Belllastar (talk) 16:50, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, if you can't fix them you can try and redo the stripes. 01:29, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (Lo) ~ For Approval
I messed up so badly >< This a record for me, first tortoiseshell and loner. Comments? 23:30, September 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the belly shading, and there doesn't appear to be any shading whatsoever on the legs not facing us. Is that intended? -- 00:05, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think it is intended but you're right, it should be added. Can you blur the shading between the elbow and haunch? And define the tail shading. 00:51, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

The shadings looking a little flat. Define it a bit?, idk --Dewsplash (talk) 00:59, September 23, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 00:59, September, 23, 2015

There's texture on the tortie parts 01:31, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload The left legs shading wasn't there at first because I forgot it >< I think there's supposed to be texture, but I could be wrong. 07:26, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see texture on the tortie parts. Also, define the main body shading plz. 09:05, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think the patterns on and the patches itself should be more smudged than this.

Reupload 23:00, September 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the patches more with a 1px hard edged brush 03:26, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 07:44, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on her front legs 09:51, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:00, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the neck/face a bit. 00:34, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:10, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the lighter pattern can be smudged more and have a smoother transition with the darker parts. 03:09, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

any advice what that? I if I smudge it anymore >< 23:07, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine to be honest. 01:30, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you just smudge the patch where the body meets the tail? The rest of the patches look fine. 13:17, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:08, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Stealthfire, this is beautiful, as always with your art. 00:23, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

I apologize, but I still can't see texture. Would you like the file for my version of the loner? I got all the colors and stuff from Beeb's file. 02:53, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Which texture do you mean? I have texture over the tortoiseshell patches and texture over the edges of the white near the patches. 22:51, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

We can't see the texture at all, actually. Are you making the texture the same way you did for Houndstar..? Because the thick lines line that aren't texture... they're lines. They should be thin and probably smudged or stylized whichever way you prefer.

I can tell you that the rogue's got texture that is drawn with long lines then smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 09:44, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Heronwing (TC) (A) - For Approval
Ayy lmao he was an adventure to do 00:53, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes? Sagestream (talk) 01:25, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

The strpes aren't smudged on the warrior. 01:26, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the pale parts a bit more? 01:47, September 24, 2015 (UTC) The warrior's stripes are a little more blurred, please blur them? Sagestream (talk) 06:10, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

imo the stripes are paler on his other images 09:50, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

darken the shading everywhere. 10:45, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 11:42, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the back leg. 00:30, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Go away roo 00:41, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

define the belly shading a tad? <span style="">00:52 Sun Sep 27

Re-uploaded: That really didn't do anything. 01:29, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes a bit more.

Re-uploaded: 15:09, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define your shading a bit more, especially on the face. 15:06, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 21:11, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Beetail (Star) ~ For Approval
God help me I can't match my pattern I made 7 months ago... (oh god making the deputy itself was a battle) 09:49, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define facial shading? And idk I think the stripes should be a little thinner. dear god this is gorgeous 10:35, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

they should be a bit darker, too. 10:45, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste on the back near his flank.--Dewsplash (talk) 13:32, September 24, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 13:32, September, 24, 2015

Re-uploaded did i get it? 13:57, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 14:35, September 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I darkened it a few ticks 01:54, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 02:50, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge the stripes just a bit more? I think it'd be moreso on the arms/paws than anywhere else, though.

Rainfur (TC) (Q) - CBA
Yes I know there's a bunch of excess and stuff that needs to be done so i'll do that I just needed to publish it before time was up and my internet was being screwy ahahhaah. I hate Icy/Appledash and Splook. 00:05, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

=( Lighten the stomach shading bae 00:20, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Add more white specks, especially on the main body, and blur them a little more? (forgot to sign: 04:31, September 25, 2015 (UTC))

Uh the declined one isn't archived. Can you next time please either just reupload under that section or wait for it to be archived? 01:46, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Roo hasn't been in PCA for quite some time, so it's not her fault that she forgot something simple like that. Lighten the shading on the ear on --> this side and the tail, please. <span style="">02:02 Fri Sep 25

Foxy was just doing a friendly reminder, there was no need for that. =/ 02:07, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

"No need for what?" Splook defending her friend who hasn't been in PCA over a year who might not be famillar with the guidelines again? Please give both of them a break. Roo is back and she's still new. Splook was trying to explain that. 02:16, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Well, Foxy was only giving a reminder for Roo too. there's honestly no need to be snappy. 04:13, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Um, Burnt, that was a little bit... harsh. Roo hasn't done anything on the wiki in ages, nor was Splook being snappy. It looks like she was being pretty calm to me. Seriously, there was nothing wrong with Splook telling Fox about that- there's no way she would have known otherwise... I think Fox joined after Roo had left.

Define light on the belly? 13:59, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can we stop telling people "they have been here for five years." "they have been /way/ longer."? You probably weren't trying to sound like that, but it just does to me. I just don't know why every time something starts there's always someone that defends their friends by saying they've been here longer and I have no idea why it matters so much. Anyway, do you mind smoothing out the tail shading? This is literally /awesome/ :)

Let's not get into a fight please. 18:47, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Fox for letting me know I'm still a bit rusty (haha get it) on some things. Didn't mean to start any trouble. -- 19:53, September 25, 2015 (UTC)

i'm sorry if I sounded snappy but I had no intention for it to be taken like this. I was just saying that Roo is practically new again so she's still familiarizing herself with the procedures, and that's fine. i'm sorry if I sounded rude, but that was 100% not my intention, I promise you. mind brightening the white a bit? <span style="">00:42 Sat Sep 26

...Splook, I apologize for my behavior back there. Anyway, can you'd fine the tail shading? This is gorgeous. 03:31, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Would you like the file for the warrior? And could you lighten the belly/chest shading juuuust a little, please? 10:43, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I'm good without the file right now, but thank you! -- 17:49, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the facial shading a tad. 10:32, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

You do know smudging shading is optional, right...? 15:06, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- 18:42, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 16:24, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Nettle (Lo) -For Approval
Ahh the texture took me way too long. 21:18, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? Beautiful! 21:29, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the belly shading just a tad. Wow, this is really gorgeous. <span style="">00:51 Sun Sep 27

he looks too light and his texture should be dulled down. 07:15, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:43, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Wow. :O This isn't some texture you get all day! <3 define light on his legs/paws?

Reuploaded 21:03, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudberry (TC) (MCA) ~ For Approval
11:09, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a bit on this --> side of the face 18:19, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 20:14, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the style is not like the shadows and lights for the first pixel of the character. That is mine. <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 06:16, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

...Are you saying that the shading style doesn't match? Because shading doesn't need to match. Anyway, Sorrel, could you smudge the earpink just a tad? This is pretty :) 10:21, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading? 10:31, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading overall, I'm having a hard time seeing it. 12:37, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

What are you talking about? The shading looks fine to me. 15:02, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source, it looks like there are two light sources and neither are defined. 15:51, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur earpink on this ---> ear? And this is just a friendly question but shouldn't the pixel match the published one? If not, that's fine XD

I think Foxy was talking about the shading being over smudged, which I agree, it could be defined more. 10:59, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups @Skyewolf um it's coming from the top-left/leftish - I thought it looked pretty obvious. 15:48, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups oops forgot the ear. And Autumnbright; what do you mean? It does match. It's just a different shading tint and style. 17:15, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Pine Needle (ki) ~ For Approval
him smol 18:33, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she be in long furred since she's in RiverClan? 12:36, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

pine needle is a tom, and hes a former rogue. it doesnt apply, not to mention the clans have only just been made then. 12:39, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Swiftbreeze (K) ~For Approval
Baby Szellő ^^ 19:43, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

...... Sagestream (talk) 20:19, September 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, it's making her look too dark. Nice job! 01:04, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Sagestream, if you didn't know, your image was declined because you didn't upload for a week. 02:49, September 28, 2015 (UTC) I stated on the vacation page I'd be gone. I had no access to a computer, therefore, how could I update it? Sagestream (talk) 06:47, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but the vacation list doesn't prevent images from being declined due to the one-week limit. It just prevents you from being removed from the project for inactivity, and lets people know that you're not going to be around. You didn't upload for a week, so it was declined. Seems fair to me, and it gives someone else a chance to take over. 08:19, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink in --> ear? I realize it's shaded, but I can't really see it. This is beautiful. 21:03, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks^^ 13:50, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Stormtail (A) - For Approval
Yeah 00:09, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

His images are short-furred, not long-furred. =P

XD That and he should be a brighter blue, he's a little dull in comparison to the StarClanner. Also, define facial and back shading?

Re-uploaded Gosh, how did I not realize he was short-furred?? 20:59, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad? 00:12, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Much better! Define facial shading and brighten earpink a tad?

Re-uploaded 20:41, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the shoulder. 09:43, September 30, 2015 (UTC)

Frog (Ro) (Ro) ~ For Approval
This was fun to make. 10:18, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading, I cant see it very well 13:09, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 09:52, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Leaf (DTC) (Lo) ~ For Approval
experimetal shading, bear with me 18:24, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Goosefeather (MCA) ~ For Approval
He has anime hair ;v; <span style="">23:53, 28, 09, 2015

Jee this is pretty. Define the shading on the legs? 00:02, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you :> <span style="">01:21, 29, 09, 2015

The spots seem to be perfectly round than smudged. Mind smudging them? Gorgeous! 22:35, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

They're circular on the other images. I'd rather not change them :x <span style="">05:28, 30, 09, 2015

Cats of the Park (Blank) - For Approval
The female blanks can have the eyelashes added on afterwards... but I'm having issues with the short-haired blank? If someone could give me a hand with that, I'd appreciate it. Also the face. The face is bad. I'm proud of the body itself on the long-hair, but the face just totally ruins it.

I think the face should be less... narrowed? In this position, i think the eyes, nose and muzzle etc should be slightly... Moved more to (our) the left because of how the cat is positioned. 10:57, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the cat's head should be moved more to the -->, and it should be a bit rounder(less elongated). 13:25, September 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the "arms" should be more straight... right now it looks a bit...
 * pulls out the second book of Harry Potter*  Btw shouldn't this pose's head be bended to a "bowing position"? I think you should squeeze the face downwards and make the ear like, face downwards. Bare with my wording =P

Bramble, I literally used the exact same stance you did, since that's the one that won. I actually referenced your blank when I did it. I also asked for help on the face, because I can't do it. Just telling me what to do gets us nowhere. I need visuals.