Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 72

Nightwhisper (Ki) - Withdrawn
Not sure if I'm allowed to put this here since I'm not a member yet but here is my first charart. My sister Tigerbird showed me how to make chararts. 20:27, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Lower the shading on the chin, and define the shading on the tail, and maybe erase a bit of the shading on that back foot. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped How do you get promoted to an apprentice rank? 02:33, January 4, 2015 (UTC) 02:34, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

A senior warrior will promote you when they think you are ready. Blur the shading more? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

This is very good for your first! Could you add some shading to his legs? I see his paw shading; but if you did add leg shading, could you possibly define it? (As in, unblur/unsmudge it?) It may just be my screen; so if you think its fine, dont worry about it. 07:45, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and I'll go make you an apprentice now.

Re-uploaded Thank you everyone! Also, I smudge my shading. 16:27, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

You can still smooth it out even though it's smudged. Although that's nice to know for future references so we don't get into another screaming match over ways to shade. x.x Smooth it out a bit more?

Re-uploaded 02:32, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading under his chin just a tad. 12:54, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:25, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

It still looks hard edged over there. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:05, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:45, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out all of the shading just a little? It still looks a bit hard edged in places. Idk, if you think its fine, feel free to leave it. 02:23, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Breeze. While you're at it thicken the shading under his chin. Looking good :D ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:05, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. It looks a little too dark to me. 22:30, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

The darkness is fine as is. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:04, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lightening it a little bit wouldn't hurt, honestly. It does appear rather dark on my laptop.

Is this still being worked on?

Re-uploaded 00:19, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

i know that this is a bit hard edged but if I smudge it more it'll get messed up. 00:22, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading please. 22:44 Sat Jan 17

The shading is very hard edged. Smudge it more? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 08:28, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

I am withdrawing. 19:09, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Archiving.

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) - Withdrawn
it feels like it's been forever since i've made a charart Brick   The Bite of '87  13:09, January 4, 2015 (UTC) Define the shading a bit more, please.

Yes; it's hard to see where the lighting is coming from. Also, try to define the earpink on <== that ear. ^^ ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  16:23, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lower the shading on the left side of the head? Nice job! Lucky I wanted this so bad Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:12, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading.

It looks like there's some waste near the ears on both sides, or I'm hallucinating. 22:50, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i62.tinypic.com/4uff2t.png Brick   The Bite of '87  14:19, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Her earpink looks purpley, or is it just my dumb eyes? 21:50, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Um tbh the ear pink is fine it's like that on her other images. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:43, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

This "it's fine" stuff needs to stop. =\ It doesn't mean you're exempt from tweaking it- which I wouldn't object to because it looks too neon/purpleish. Define the shading.

Withdrawing. I think this should of been declined regardless because of the lack of work rule, but withdrawing because I just don't have the time to work on chararts at the moment. Brick  The Bite of '87  17:05, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Archiving.

Frogtail (Ki) - Withdrawn
This is my first image, comments? Flameclaw1 (talk) 12:51, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink please. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:52, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

His nosepink needs to be black to match his other images. Also, define the shading just a tad. Damn, this is really good for your first! 13:08, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up his colour, its too dark a grey compared to his other images. 13:09, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Wow, how'd you do that? You can colour pick from the apprentice image, the unshaded part of the back paw is good.--Stealthfire star (talk) 20:23, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

The top of the earpink is a little too much on both ears. and can you smooth out the shading a bit. I also cant see the mouth so brighten up the neck maybe? Everything else is fine though. (3 days without any touch. Are you still there to make your Charart?)  14:31, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Eh to ask "still working" stuff is only for the leads. And it hasn't been four days yet so... <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:20, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Eh, are you still working, Flame?

One week without uploads- sorry, but I have to decline this. Anyone without a project may take over, and you don't need to ask- just reserve it.

I'll take over. 11:30, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

I am still working, please let me do this! Just give me a bit more time and I will do it! Please. Flameclaw1 (talk) 17:06, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but a week is a week- we can't make exceptions. If we start doing it for one user, we have to do it for the rest of them. It would be neverending and counterproductive if we did that.

Yeah, withdrawing because I want to work on Jackdaw's Cry. 15:50, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can I take over? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 17:06, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Just reserve it. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:07, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

So, um, is this going to be archived? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 00:44, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

No just reup over it and continue down. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:47, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

I'm archiving it to free up space. Just repost.

Screech (Ki)~ Withdrawn
I did so bad on him X( I just really want someone to help me on this. (So bad for my first Charart & I bet it'll get declined) 13:30, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

No it's good! Dull down the ear pink and blur it more. Also, theres a bit of waste near his left ear. You're doing great Bramble :) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:32, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading, while you're at it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:33, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Did you tweak the nose? Perhaps you should tweak it back. Look at my kits as examples, also it should say for evaluation. I do 99% kits anyway ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:35, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS accedently added .png a second time to my file, but Oh well!I think I'm doing pretty well. (how do I get it up for approval?)  14:14, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

When a senior warrior thinks that the image is good enough after improvements, theyll promote you to an apprentice and they'll change the heading. If an image is good enough, they'll approve it and add it to his article, for now, darken and define the shading, if there isn't any, add it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 14:43, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS made the chest a little bit brighter. Its going to look disgusting if I brighten it even more. 19:18, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest you for shading to use a darker color instead of adding light cause that would throw the color off. By the way, add some white to his eyes Plz. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 01:53, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS Add whites to the corners and darken the legs, tail, head, and the chest a bit. (Turns out, I actually like this! 02:16, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Great! ^^ Now I think you should add another layer, under the linear art layer and shade in the parts where light isn't coming from. Use a darker color than the base color. To see what I mean just read the tutorials. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:17, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS I hope you guys can see the differance... He looks so KAWII!^^ <3  20:57, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste on his head. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:17, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS These are going to be daily! So keep spammin' these suggestions! My little Screech ♪♪ AHHH!♪ 00:51, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Is his ear erased? If so, repair it ^^ and there is waste beside his legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:55, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named File:Screech.kit.png. <span style="">3:07 Mon Jan 12

His nose has to be black, he's a black cat. 05:34, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS First: I blacked the nose Second: I didn't remove the ear Third: Got rid of waste Fourth: Im glad new people are helping me on my charart. Fifth: He just looks Adorable <3 21:45, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

You did remove the ear. If you compare the <== ear to the other images, it looks different. Draw it back plz? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:35, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

REUPS Hmm.. Anyone like the ear 20:46, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

maybe lighten his base a tiny bit he seems very dark... —  ☁ ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ  courage doesn't always roar!  23:35, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

His ear still looks cut off. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 10:38, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Actually the whole image looks choppy. Maybe paste just the lineart over again once you make sure its sized correctly? I'd do something for ya but got no comp right now, but Ill be back home on Friday. 23:11, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

It also looks like there's some waste to his left side. Not sure if that's just the lineart, or what. Try colorpicking from his other images for the base. <span style="">23:20 Sun Jan 18 23:20, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawn Noo! I lost the file D:I really didn't want to do this! 13:23, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Archiving.

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki) ~ Withdrawn
Here's lil' Honey :3 14:05, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest outward to the back? Also try to fix the ear pink. Its not the colour its the way it is set up. It looks rugged. (Sorry if you feel conflicted!) 20:55, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

She looks like a silver cat almost, lighten up the shading a bit. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:13, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Better? 20:01, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten her up a bit. She still looks a little grey. She should be as white as Cloudtail. 21:37, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, she is a light-coloured cat. She doesn't need to be as white as Cloudtail. Maybe lighten the shading a tad. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:57, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Um... If she lightened up the shading, someone will tell her to define it again. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:08, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing 18:36, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

May i take over, then? 21:37, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Archiving.

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) - Withdrawn
I love his name. All colors are right from the ancient's .psd file.

Nice! Maybe smooth out the stripes a bit? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 18:56, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

He doesn't have stripes...? Did you comment on the wrong section?

He/she may have meant the texture? Im not sure. Either way; it matches his other images perfectly. Define the tail shading just a tad, please. 23:50, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. This looks good :p <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:22, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Color picked from a different and lighter part of the ear pink.

Compared to his other images, I think the texture is a bit thick on this one. I don't know - I'm a kit with barely any experience :P Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 00:27, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

I have no idea what you're talking about? I made the texture like I did on the other image I made for him...? Can one of the senior users with loads more experience with texture translate what FireTail means?

Never mind. *face palm* Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 22:06, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ==> leg and lighten the neck shading. <span style="">22:08 Sat Jan 17

Withdrawing for something else byE.

I'll take over. 15:51, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gonna archive this so it doesn't sit.