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Minnowtail (Alt. A2) ~ On Hold
I think I made her too dark >m< I shall fix that.... Anywho, she was described with a dappled pelt~ Comments? 23:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, especially on the back ear. I love it! 8DDD 23:17, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes arent showing :c 00:08, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the nosepink. Looks pretty! 8D 08:13, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the face just a tad. Nice job, Fallow. 11:15, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Fallow! C: Define the earpink. 14:47, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks everyone ^^ 16:58, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the belly a tiny bit? :3 04:14, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face, too. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  11:23, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 16:27, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? :3 14:46, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is great and all, but who says that was a mistake? It was never stated otherwise, she could very well be a dappled dark gray cat.... 23:21, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I was thinking, I think that since she was only mentioned once it would be an alt but I think that this should be the main apprentice image and the warrior should be changed. 23:27 Sun Mar 25

Paleclaw's right. We're already having a discussion about partial-description alts, and this would be partial. She already is gray, in this image, just mentioned with dapples. All cats have some kind of pelt pattern, for what I know, but it just may not be visible. Plus, dapples don't make much of a difference, sorry. 23:34, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come cats like Lilystem get an alt. for being described as a tabby? I think this should stay. 01:53, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps Lilystem should be tweaked to a tabby then. Either way, I thought we decided something about what gets alts and what gets added? Didn't we decide that if it's completely plausible then it'd be added? I can't quite remember, but I thought that's what we worked out. Meaning this alt should be declined and all her images tweaked. 00:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Isn 't this sirt of assuming her description? We don't know for sure that she's actually a dappled cat, and it could very well be a mistake. But in any case, if this goes ahead, cats like Mudclaw would have to be tweaked too, and it seemd really unecessary. *Bad at making points* Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 00:07, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Skt's right. This is assuming descriptions, something we don't do here. If we don't assume with genders and eyelashes in the manga, then why are we assuming descriptions? I say we keep it, and if we find out later that she dappled, then we can delete this and tweak the others. It's not partial, honestly. We know she's gray. For all we know, the dappled coat could be an error. 06:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I've decided to place this image on hold until a final decision can be made. This is not to be declined, approved or archived until said decision is reached. 07:05, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

-didn't notice Misty left a comment- Should I reupload or wait until we figure out what we're doing with her? 13:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploading. Cloudeh told me to start up the discussion so... I think this should stay an alt. It was the only time she was described with it, and she has never been described with dapples in the alligiances. 18:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think she meant start it on the talk page. XD But really, since when do we not add descriptions purely cause they were only mentioned once? If we did that, Spottedleaf wouldn't have half her description, Firestar wouldn't have a pale belly, Brindleface wouldn't be mottled, so and and so forth. We shouldn't assume it's wrong just cause it was only mentioned once. 08:44, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the shading on the ear. 01:22, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Since the light source is coming from over there---> the shading would be darker. I'd rather not change it :s 15:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt.A)~ CBA
I don't think I uploaded it right, but I tried. Comments? 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded-- got rid of the waste 18:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I don't know what happened to the last one. It's not in the declined nor in the approved, I thought this was being worked on already. 19:33 Fri Mar 30

No, it's fine. Mounty, you derp. =P

Define and darken the shading. 20:23, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Heathertail.apprentice.alt.png. 20:32, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Defined and darkened the shading and renamed it 21:29, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Loonie, would it be instead because Heathertail has another one? 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, head, and back paws. 21:50, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

When did that get there? *wasn't there before* smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. 22:36 Fri Mar 30

Define the shading, and I think there's waste on her front paws as well. 03:52, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Got rid of the waste and defined the shading 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

The ear-punk ear-pink seems to go over the line thing next to the ear... o3o On both ears, by the way. It's your choice, but if you want to, can you define the depth in the eye? *Your choice* Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, too. And it might just be my computer, but there seems to still be waste, too. Sorry if that made no sense about the ear and the line and the ear-punk ear-pink x3 13:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more ^^ 13:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the back ear. And, optional, but can you add a little shading to the side of the face that's not towards us? It'll give it more depth. 21:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC

Reuploaded--defined the shading, smudged the earpink into the pelt and got rid of the waste 22:41, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste on his ear, back paw, and front paw. 23:03, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink some more and blur it. 23:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this. And try to not upload a different image every time you reupload. 23:45, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--removed the waste and blured the earpink into the pelt 21:48, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Moonshine, stop uploading a new image each time. Rename it what Atelda told you to. 21:56, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I tried but it became a redlink. I don't know what to do! I am sorry 22:00, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

You just upload it as   Just...it works for everyone, it should work for you. >.> Also, erase the waste. 22:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--erased the waste 18:56, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste by the far ear. 01:24 Tue Apr 3

I can't get rid of it. I have tried erasing it 4 or 5 times. I don't really know what else to do. 22:58, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded--I tried to get rid of the waste, but I don't think it actually went away 11:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

It didn't; Do you use layers? If so, scroll through every single layer and try erasing it. If that doesn't work or you don't use layers, I don't know what to do o3o 11:26, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want me to get rid of the waste for you? 16:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

theres waste still on the cat 01:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brackentail, please refrain from repeating comments. Can you smudge the earpink a tad? 13:37, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--I think I got it. If I didn't I don't know what else to do. I also smudged the earpink. 18:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. 22:02, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--I smudged it to the max, I think 14:38, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded--I forgot to color in the nose... 14:43, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

This is wonderful, I don't see anything you could change. CBA? 01:49, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Flick (Ro) For Approval
reserved it and finished as fast as I could. I hate this. Dx Changes might not be showing...Changes are here. Comments?

12:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, but needs a transparent backround 12:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Grr. I know. I can't get a transparent background... when I took the blank from the charart page, it was white... 12:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a proper light source and define it. 14:29, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I can make it transparent for you if you dont know how to do it, ,16:47,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks :) 21:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, reuploaded. Experimenting with fur textures. Gahh, changes ain't showing, look right here. I lightened the neck shading just a little bit. Yuck, yuck, yuck. I also have one without the texture so if you want to see, tell me. 01:31, April 3, 2012 (UTC.

The fur texture looks like mottles. Define the shading and light source. Don't worry, practice makes perfect! Also, blur the earpink. 05:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

All right C: Redone. I made one without texture and one with, but I'm going for the one with texture, even though it's atrocious, it's the less atrocious of the two 05:35, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

The fur texture still looks like mottles... 00:36, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I wanted it to look like that, but I can change it. If you all like the non textured one better, I can make it the non textured one 00:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I know you wanted it like that, but sorry, it doesn't really look like fur, more like mottles. And this is a short haired cat, any smudging on a short-hair would be less dramatic. 02:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

All right reuploaded If changes ddon't show, it's here 03:03, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:52, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767433748300.png 03:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

You'll need to dull down the highlights or blur them or something...I don't think it should be that glossy-looking unless the description calls for it. Plus, it seems unnatural. 06:03, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I redi it :) 18:42, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Gaghhhh.... better? http://www.iaza.com/work/120407C/iaza17767482237200.png 18:45, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened shading, defined light source, fixed blurred lineart and ears. 23:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is 80% and better. Add a bit of depth to the eye, and perhaps slightly blur the edges of the back shading. Nice job. :3 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you so much :D 05:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Move the haunch and chest highlights up slightly. 02:08, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:11, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the neck shading. 15:31 Thu Apr 12

Reuploaded My uploads of this may be a bit delayed... hope to get this CBA'd soon though. Up to the leads though, and I understand if ya think it's not ready. ;) 00:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) (Alt) ~ For Approval
I'm really proud of this :3 Changes aren't showing. 11:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste at the ears. Make her muzzle shorter and extend the line on her face. 13:33 Tue Apr 3

Can you also define the eye color? To me, it looks pure white. 21:58, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry about the white on the side of her mouth. I tried getting rid of it but nothing worked. 23:19, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch and back scars look a little thick. The scraggly fur could be a little smoother. Could you also darken the shading and blur it some? 16:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's defined to the max, but I blurred it. 23:05, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste by the ears and there's a line coming out of the bridge of the nose so get rid of that and I'll CBA. 22:39 Sat Apr 7

Reuploaded I also got rid of that white part near her mouth. 18:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Her ear seems to be split a little more deeply and raggedly than her MC that I made. 22:36, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

When I copied the colors and everything, I made sure the ear tear was exactly the same. 20:48, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 06:29 Wed Apr 11

Sorry to interrupt, but I feel the belly highlight/area with no shading should be extended, as it's kind of small right now. 01:58, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I tried working with that, but when I do that it sadly comes out bad. 22:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Willie (Ro) ~ For Approval
This was a fail... >-> *flails arms* I tried :P 21:48, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Wow! This is awesome. ;D Define the shading on the tail and belly-ish area. Lookin' good.~ 22:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 16:55, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't really have any shading on the belly, so I only defined it on the tail.. 21:13, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on both hind legs. This is beautiful<3 13:42, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you :3  20:33, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I still feel that the shading could be defined some more. Don't be afraid to darken it a lot. 02:00, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading as far as it could go, I can define it more, though. >.<  00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Under evaluation
Okay, I'm rusty at this, and fail at shading, and feel like I'm about to do somethinf wrong, I will add shading after I'm done testing with it, seeing which seems more normal, and yes there is shading on the tail, and yes, I tried to get as close to the original image as possible, and yes, I suck XD, please don't hurt me *hides* Because I'm sure I'm doing this wrong XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:16, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Btw, added note, someone might have to help me with the shading XD I am Your worst nightmare  23:18, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more, make the ear pink less neon, and lighten/blur the highlights. Not bad ^^. 23:19, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lol what shading, the only shading on the charart is the tail XD, and by less neon you mean darken? And alright, going to blur the highlights now XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:21, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I added shading I am Your worst nightmare  23:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it File:Minty.rogue.alt.png? <3 00:26, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's what it is. I am Your worst nightmare  00:29, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oh wait, alright, nvm XD I am Your worst nightmare  00:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  I am Your worst nightmare  00:33, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's not an alt..... rename it just plain Minty.rogue.png 00:55, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  I am Your worst nightmare  01:01, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

No capitalization. Minty.rogue.png exactly. 02:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Well you could have said that the first time. I am Your worst nightmare  21:38, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Not bad, Birdbrain. Blur the highlights. 23:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  blurred highlights, but now the shading looks seriously messed XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

You can redo the shading if you want, but blur it too, and the highlights. 02:14, 05, 04, 2012

Alright, I'll have to redo the whole image then, because this was made on Pixlr X3, I'l have to do it after the weekend though, because I'm going to my trailer. -- I am Your worst nightmare  23:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, can someone help me with the shading? I'll do the rest x3 I seriously suck. I am Your worst nightmare  00:08, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think.... I think if you let someone take over or help you... you can't call the image yours anymore? You'll get it with practice... maybe look over the shading placement thingy in the apprentice tutorials. 00:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I've tried that, nothing works, I'm just naturally sucky at shading I am Your worst nightmare  00:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm... try redoing it, and maybe... the shading placement is your choice, but try to replica the highlight/shading placement on another cat. Blur the highlights, and define a light source. Maybe doing a quick check over the Apprentice Tutorials would help, even if you don't think so. Keep trying ^^ 21:21, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading placements don't work for me, plus, Pixlr is weird, and I have no idea on why Gimp isn't liking me at the moment, and I was never good with shading, and I've been doing chararts for awhile (Not on this site, other wikis in general) shading is not, and probably never will be my strong suit X3. But fine, I'll try to redo it. I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  22:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading looks fine the way it is, maybe I should brighten the highlights instead of stressing myself over shading, what do you guys think x3? I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  16:42, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, just smooth out the edges and blur it a bit more-- 20:26, April 11, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

The shoulder highlight seems to be in the wrong spot, I would move it a tad to the right. Also brighten it just a tad. 15:34 Thu Apr 12

I don't think the highlight on the end of th' tail is supposed to be there. It's not there on any of her other images. 02:11, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Q) ~ CBA
I do believe she's preggers now. Bleh. Comments? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:12, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, I thought she wasn't going to get a queen image. I remember that I asked if she would get one, and I think Shelly said no. 16:27, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

No, I asked, and got a yes. Also, take a look at the talk page again, I think she agreed she gets one. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 16:31, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less gray. 17:37, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Explodes* Omg so epic! :O This may just be my lap top lighting/screen but darken and define shading =P 16:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good! Smudge the orange color in the direction of the fur just a tad more. 01:20, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't change the earpink cause it's the same colour as the other images. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 02:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the orange and bit orangier; it looks kinda pale in comparison to her other chararts and smudge/enlarge the ear-pink. 03:25, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's this? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:40, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I really think both this and your kittypet version of her (I know it's already been archived, but I never got the chance to say this) could benefit from the use of special brushes to achive the same look. I make the Glalaxy brush in GIMP incredibly small, and used that in her patches after I smudged them slightly. I only say this, because her warrior image was not only smudged. Also, gah, Cherrytail, why! You could have picked a much better mate D: 14:14, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh. Thank you. -Hates patches- I'll try that. ^^ Heh. Sharpclaw. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little taller. :3 23:16, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How'd I do? o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:18, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. Just make the ginger/brown/whatever patches ever so slightly brighter to match the other images and I'll CBA. 12:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 00:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)'''

-"helps" Paleh- :P CBA? <3 01:22, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Pinenose (Q) - For Approval
I finished The Last Hope today, and it didn't feel... complete to me for some reason. Here's Pinenose. Comments? 19:16, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 20:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin'  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 01:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around her chest and the right forepaw~ 14:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes should show when there's no more waste. 23:23, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also around the tail, I forgot to mention that ^^; 01:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I cleared it all, so it's okay. 15:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

There looks like there is some waste or blurred lineart around the chest/neck and the front leg furthest from us. (Could just be me). Looks wondeful! :3 20:31, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

...XD Raven, that's what she cleared. Blur the belly shading a bit c: 23:16, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:38, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make her face and tail shading lighter. Pretty.~ :3 23:34, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added highlights, can remove them if desired. 01:10, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Ro) ~ For Approval
Chu changes showing? Anyways, Clovertail's rogue. It's ugly ;-; 12:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sweet! May be just my computer, but define the earpink and the shading on the back legs. This is great! 12:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:56, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights", or at least make them a little bigger, but it's your choice :3 *steals* 15:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 15:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the back of the paw darker than the front. 17:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

You should difine where the light is coming from, it looks like its coming from three places. 01:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, too~ Oh, and Bracken: shading placement is artist's choice :3 02:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry! I'll re-upload in a few minutes! 21:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading. 21:49, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the shading on the haunch and back, and define the eye depth a little. 23:37, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and tail shading  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 05:08, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (Ro) - For Approval
Changes not showing again? Here. --> http://www.iaza.com/work/120408C/iaza13655678205100.png 17:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mooneh, this is number 41 on the list xD You nub~ I think a SM may have to decline this. 17:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Now it's fine. 8D 18:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match his other images. Add more and make them lighter. Also define the shading. 19:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

>.> The stripes match /exactly/ from his old rogue, which should have matched his other images. I'll fix the rest, though. 19:21, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry Mooneh, but I compared this image to his other rogue and the stripes on his old one are still lighter and thinner and there's a few more. Also, lighten up the brown to match his elder image. 19:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Try to copy the cave-guard on this one, and add some mud. 23:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I added mud in the places like the cave-guard, and some more. I know it's too dark, I'll lighten it in the next re-upload and fix the stripes if necessary. 13:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add mottles to the mud to create a more natural effect. To do this, use a speckly brush and burn the mud many times, using different settings, and it will almost create itself in this fashion. Also, smudge the mud some. 13:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

He;s got waste around his tail, back, head, and front legs. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:53, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ...I forgot to lighten it again. Dx Yay for join.me 8D 14:11, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I lightened it. 14:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the mud, and give it some texture by adding darker flecks to it. Also, define the shading. 15:06, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the shading in black, as it was a darker brown. I can't smudge the mud anymore, sorry. Dx And there /are/ darker flecks on the it, but I can make them darker or add more if you want? 8D 19:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add different shaded layers to the mud to give it some depth Or would it be height? xD 19:21, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. x.x <span style="">15:01, 04 09, 2012

This should be the new image showing, the mud still needs broken up by more flecks. My images for Screech of Angry Owl or Stoneteller (NP) should help give you an idea of what I'm talking about :)  20:00, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm going to have to fix this again...but anyway, comments? >.< <span style="">14:32, 04 10, 2012

Snake (BC) (Ro) - Under Evaluation
No! Don't look at my shame! D: comments? 20:45, April 8, 2012 (UTC) 16:44, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. Fill in the rest of the ear with the earpink, and optional, but add depth to the legs (highlights, maybe). Are you a kit? If so this should be under evaluation. Keep trying, this is all right for a first attempt ^^ 21:46, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad, fill the ear with earpink and blur it, and add color to the nose. ~Fallen 22:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I changed it to short haired and made his pelt color lighter. I think I forgot the color to the nose... I'll get it later. 23:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base colour and make it short haired to match the other main images? 22:16, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more "highlights"/lighter parts, (you don't have to) on the face and tail. Just a preference, ignore this if you want. 22:57, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light source, as it doesn't really make sence now. (Sorry if I'm wrong, and if this is sort of what Dazzle said :/) <span style="">03:16, 09, 04, 2012

Make the teeth match his old collar, give shading to the collar, and color his nose. ^^ :3  <span style="">13:39, 04 09, 2012

Reuploaded. It was a little hard to get the collar, bu I got it. I colored in the nose too. :3. Hopefully this is more than 80%. 00:33, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure this is 80% done. However it's fairly close, so you get a week to make it 80% complete, otherwise it'll be declined. 19:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Guys, I don't understand. I reuploaded it yesterday. Why aren't the changes showing? Maybe my kindle is screwed up. But the new one was on here yesterday, but when I checked the file page or whatever, it has his old rouge picture over the original one. I'm so confused. Anyway, my dads not letting me use the laptop, and I said on the vacation list I might be back on the weekend. Does that mean I cant become an apprentice? D: 22:31, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smooth out the edges-- 19:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the edge of the earpink and fill in the nose. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:25, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

One of the dog teeth seems to be sticking out of his chin. Unless its supposed to be like that (which I doubt), please fix that. Also, there seems to be a black pixel right by that tooth near the bottom. 16:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

May be my computer, but shading seems kind of flat. Maybe looking at the apprentice tutorials may help, though shading placement is the artist's choice. Maybe tone down the highlights a tad. 02:31, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the highlights seem a bit confined to that one space on the back. Blur them, maybe add a highlight to the chest and haunch to give it more depth. Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. Keep trying, I think you're getting the hang of this ^^ And there's two black pixels on the collar that I don't think are supposed to be there. Fill them with the color of the collar (orange). Add some depth to the eye, too :/ 02:33, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Pine (TS) (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments? 03:44, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 03:47 Mon Apr 9

Define the ear pink just a tad? 04:08, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems too dark, and the scars seem a little too straight. 19:55, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'd rather leave the scars as is, they seemed rather straight in the comic. 20:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Ro) ~ For Approval
This was unbelieving hard to do. I am no good at tabbies xD. Suggestions for improvements, please! 12:41, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Color the nose. :3 <span style="">13:40, 04 09, 2012

Upload it over the old image and match the desing with other images, you cant just change the patch desing. I dont understand why you choosed so hard cat to do. , 14:30,April 9,2012 )UTC)

Trololol I was actually planning on doing this to save someone XP Define the tail shading. Although this does look over 80%... 14:57 Mon Apr 9

Add the pale belly, muzzle, chest and paws C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 23:49, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-named and re-uploaded. Too many changes to list. xD 04:22, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful!! Maybe blur the earpink and the sharper streaks of white on the stomach :3-- 04:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think it is too dark xD 06:02, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes still don't match. 12:34, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit less neon-- 19:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Some of teh earpink looks like it's leaking out of the ear a little x3 21:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Lessened ear-pink and made it less neon. 01:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. 02:39, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:59, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes, make them darker and shorter like on her kittypet version. 12:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

She looks so wonderful! <3 I would suggest blurring the darker shading quite a lot. -- 15:23, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

This isn't bad, especially when you're trying to match a Mounty. Smudge the stripes more. 22:49, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure this is over 80% done. This is now for approval and Berryflower will become an apprentice. 23:33, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole image a tad-- 01:16, April 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Re-uploaded ♥ ♥ Berryflower ♥ ♥  Ima like a field of BERRIES!! 05:26, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Rock (Ro) - For Approval
I know I forgot to clear the waste, ignore it and comment on something else other than that, and I'll clear it on the next upload. I think I liked the old one better. Comments? 18:07, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is difficult to see, can you define it? 18:29, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a tad 21:17, April 9, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded Took a few tries to get the shading right. 22:35, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the mud and the shading. <span style="">11:45, 11, 04, 2012

Reuploaded Re-did the mud. 21:22, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like there's earpink in both ears...o.o <span style="">21:50, 04 12, 2012

There is. I don't think there is anything wrong with that. 02:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (Ro) ~ For Approval
I found a spot! Yay, first charart up in a while. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 23:03, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Are there scars? I can't quite tell. If not, add them. 8D 23:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Is there a light part along his back? If so, make it brighterr <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Take the earpink from his warrior (if you did, take it directly from the center). If you did that...then just disregard this x3 05:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   May the odds be ever in your favor 11:14, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could be my computer (I'll try looking at this from a different one later) but could you make the earpink a little more pink? Blur where the back highlight meets thhe shading to smooth it out. Nice job ^^ 13:06, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the scars pink to match his warrior? And what Ivyshell said. This is beautiful! 19:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 20:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scars brighter and maybe more red. They're kinda hard to see.... 21:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Nice. <span style="">11:28, 11, 04, 2012

Does it look a bit green to anyone else? It looks kind of green to me. 23:37, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

You're not the only one, Cinder. Not sure if it looks like that to any others, but could you (maybe) get rid of the (possible) green-ish tint? 08:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the color looks like the warrior but the warrior's shading is brown tinted so just make the shading a reddish brown color instead of black, keep the base coat the same. 15:40 Thu Apr 12

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  22:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Dodge (Ro)~ For Evaluation
My first charart. Comments? If the picture isnt showing, its here. ~Fallen 23:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nice for your first charart. ^^ Blur the body shading a bit and slightly define the stripes. <span style="">11:22, 11, 04, 2012

Define the stripes they are hard to see 12:18, April 11,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stripes defined and shading blurred more. Thanks, DJ :3 --~Fallen 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This is pretty for a first. Define the earpink at the tips? 22:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image has a yellow-green hue. Fix that? 23:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look yellow-green to me ._. 15:41 Thu Apr 12

I think it just looks yellow... Tone down the highlights(?) a bit. 00:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ear pink. I did`nt use any layers, so I darkened the main color. --~Fallen 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 01:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Ro) ~ For Approval
Hey guys! Another rogue up. C; Rogues win all. You know it. Comments, please and thank you?

02:33, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nice one! Define the tail shading, if any. And darken the front faraway leg to match the back faraway leg ^^ 02:35, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:41, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Uhh You went off the old one I think right? That's a triangle tabby, Boulder's images are being redone so you can do whatever tabby style on this unless Paleh is still gonna do the other images. 03:58 Wed Apr 11

Blur the flank shading. <span style="">11:16, 11, 04, 2012

Yes I plan to. I think I have an open space, so if I do then I'll post my version now. If not I'll do it ASAP. XD Or send you the file on chat to match. 20:34, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid stripes completely, based off his new elder. 01:41, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat and add/define the pale belly and chest. You want the xcf for the colors? 14:24, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Onion (Ro) ~ For Approval
I'm proud of this one. c: Umm...I forgot that she was short-haired, and I made her long-haired (lol, fail), but I'm going to keep her this way since she only gets a rogue image. Comments for improvement? 04:50, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the belly shading just a tad. Also, if there's no specified pelt length, it's artist's choice. =P 11:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also (to everyone), about the belly shading, please don't tell me to blur it, since even though it may look like it needs blurring, it's the effect of a black patch on the belly. 23:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink extend down a little more? 15:42 Thu Apr 12

I'm not sure, because I don't like the earpink to extend fully down the ear. However, if it's needed, feel free to disagree. 23:45, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (Ro) - For Approval
o.o Another rogue. I think this looks okay. Comments for improvement? :3 <span style="">12:01, 11, 04, 2012

Aww, cute :3 Define the shading  12:12, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it a tad, too. 12:13, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome~ Add a couple more stripes and define the pale belly/chest. :3 12:32, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too hard, (bad at explaining) blur them a bit. 01:08, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  The stripes might need a bit more blurring still. <span style="">02:40, 13, 04, 2012

Snowy (Ro) - For Approval
Comments? 16:51, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading moar :3 17:44 Wed Apr 11

Reuploaded. 20:25, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading a bit? 13:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind legs and the tial. Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 01:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments for Improvement? 23:20, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the highlights/shading so the white stands out? The entire pelt seems gray.

Like that? Changes may not be showing though. 23:29, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful! :3 There are a few areas of shading that you may want to blur (Around the belly area and around the shoulder) 11:42, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole image a tad. It still looks gray 11:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the scars. 17:59, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

D'awwww, I wanted this one Dx Darken the eye color a tiny bit, unless you took it from the leader '-' 21:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

And I think he needs a longer tail. 21:55, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No he doesn't. Only cats like Tallstar, where it's a prominent feature, will get longer tails. 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Alt. Ro) ~ For Approval
Wheeee Comments? 02:56 Thu Apr 12

As much as I love this.... it needs to match the other alt. 05:17, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh, we've already gotten this taken care of. I told her I'd redo the pattern on mine since her's is more realistic. 05:18, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Oh dear, back up goes the ass shading charart again. XD Well then just darken the shading on the far paw and this'll be good. :) 05:20, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Trolololol 05:28 Thu Apr 12

XD Paleh~ Whiten the white a bit. 08:10, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:30 Thu Apr 12

Jag (Ro) ~ For Approval
Doing Jag again. =3 Comments? 04:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more mud and put some lighter mottled in it? :) 05:10, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Extend the earpink down a bit? 15:46 Thu Apr 12

'''Reuploaded. '''=D 23:58, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

8D Blur the mud and maybe add some fleck-y parts around it~ 07:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Nightcloud (Ro) ~ For Approval
I'm not really happy with the new info released by Kate... I actually sympathize with this poor cat, and I'd think she'd give her stupid son a cuff over the ear for betraying his Clan, not that she'd run off with him. Ah well. Comments? 20:57, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah... Oh well. *shrug* Define the shading a little bit? 23:50, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:49, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Ro) ~ For Approval
I used the collar from Scourge, so I hope no one minds. If it bothers y'all that much, I can try and fix it...but...I'd rather not. I did do the rest of the image though...including the fail claws.

The claws seem a tad bit big. This is what I noticed with Scourge when I zoomed up close, and how I did Snipe's claws: there is one pixil of the claw color, and you need four pixils around it, one on top, both sides, and bottom. It looks really neat when you zoom away from the image, so maybe give that a try? :) 21:28, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried two pixels of color instead of one. Any better?

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  23:43, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

The claws seems a bit boxy, maybe add an extra black pixel onto the tips of each to make them look pointier. 14:06, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Breezepelt (Ro) ~ For Approval
Little twat.... >.>;;;;; Anyways, he's a black kitteh, so I can't complain... much

Define the tail shading? ^^ 07:32, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Stick (Cat) (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments for Improvement? 23:43, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Awesome Rowan 8D 04:21 Fri Apr 13

Maybe thicken the nick a bit. o3o Nice job, Rowan~ 07:33, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Bone (Ro) - For Approval
He gots a rainbow collar and he don't care who sees! I used the same pattern from the old blank c: 02:01, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Nice, blur the scars a bit more, and Looine if they said anything, i think they would be like, killed. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blue the black just a bit, and I have to disagree about blurring the scars. You can hardly see them as is. Define them a bit. 14:05, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (D) - For Approval
Let's try this again... 02:22, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Fabulous 83... hm... maybe... define the shading in the space between the front leg and the haunch. May be just my computer, but I don't know... Ignore me if it's just my computer : /. 02:39, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

... :-| (sigh) Smooth out the tail to more closely resemble the warrior image. 02:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlights brighter so it matches the warrior more. Nice. :3 <span style="">03:09, 13, 04, 2012

Desaturate her juuussst a tad, she's a bit to ginger compared to her warior. -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 04:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle (Ro) ~ For Approval
It feels awesome to have another charart up for approval. ♥ Comments? . 06:14, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

8D Thistly~! You're finally uploading again<3 Define the shading on the legs and tail~ 08:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded . 08:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistly<333 Define the earpink a bit. I love this<3 10:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistley <3333 8D. Smudge the stripes a tad more? Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 12:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

This is so much btter than mine <3 Define the earpink. 15:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)