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Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Me no like. ;-; (Did the image align? or did I misname? I can't tell)

Smooth out the shading on the back, define the hind leg shading, define the eye depth, and blur the earpink just a tad. Looks nice, other than that. 18:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. 18:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Don't know if changes are showing.

Blur/smudge the shading more, and smooth it out. It's looking a bit blotchy right now. 23:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have no idea why this didn't happen when I did Spiketail. Probably because I'm used to setting it to at least 20/25

Define the shading on the legs. Those eyes look sexy X3 09:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit? 12:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened shading and tried to define a bit but I don't know if I can see it. By the way, when you said define shading on legs, did you mean all? And thanks about the eyes, Foxy :P  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:38, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah define the shading on all four legs :p 13:39, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on all four legs. 02:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, but it sort of confuses me to define the shading and the light. I'm not sure if changes are showing but I wanted to get this done so I didn't get this declined for lack of work. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:18, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Defining the light and shading means that basically you need to erase either some shading or put some more shading in, and in this case, it appears you need to erase some shading. So define the light on the legs? :P 13:46, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded When I defined the light on the back two legs, it looked weird so I ended up vaguely getting the front right paw and not doing the back left paw. Then again, I'm not sure if the changes are showing, but I wanted to show that I'm still active (The three days felt longer...) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:20, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the depth on the main body 08:47, April 22, 2015 ( UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading. 20:17, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I apologize if changes aren't showing. I'm not feeling well at the moment /)_(\ I try to upload within the next two days because for some reason it feels like longer. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:41, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. There would also be some light there too, actually.

I'm honestly having a hard time seeing the shading. Maybe darken it quite a bit? Also, define the eye depth. 20:28, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W) - CBA
Okay.-- 00:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

So yeah, I see no shading whatsoever. Define shading everywhere please 00:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

The lineart looks faded too, actually.

As well as the earpink, define and brighten the earpink 00:54, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''My bad, i had the shading layer hidden still. Not too sure about the lineart- but im hoping i fixed it? It looked solid black on my monitor. 01:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

There's still barely any shading. Darken it alot 01:08, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:22, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Looks much better. Define the shading on the legs? And possibly the tail? Only when you're feeling less tired maybe XD 01:26, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:35, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

He's in WindClan so shouldn't he be short haired? 02:46, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you thicken the tail lineart a bit? I like him. 02:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't the term 'patchy fur' mean 'missing patches of fur'? lmao 13:18, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing - i have a ton of exams to study for. Anyone without a project can take this. 20:02, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. 20:27, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Let me just say this cat has one of the worst names in the series, along with Shredtail and Maggottail. 20:47, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lovely. Define the light on the legs? 21:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! 21:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. 11:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

He looks a tad red- could you shift the base color ever so slightly?

Reuploaded. 23:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink more triangle-like. Lighten the shading a bit, and the pelt color just a tad, like two notches; on my color spectrum, he's a murky reddish-brown. Also define the light on all four legs? 00:49, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:39, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Looking a bit better, in my opinion. Acestar of ThunderClan (talk) 04:28, April 26, 2015 (UTC)Ace

Please don't comment without critique as its considered spam. As for the image, define the shadow on the back leg farthest? 17:23, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Try and add some ragged fur around the bald patches like Raggedstar's 17:39, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

There are ragged fur patches around the bald, they're just not very visible. Maybe make the lines black? 00:55, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I kept the ragged fur the same color and just raised the opacity on that layer. 20:30, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Evalution
Yay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? R a v e n s t e p⋆ 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Better? 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we wait before this is settled? 免得我们还要重做 02:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

No- there's no need, considering it wouldn't be done for a long time.

As far as I'm concerned, the chest is smudged with a hard-edged brush 08:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 01:31, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

he needs texture, and on top of that texture theres dull highlights, and it was all smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 04:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

The chest too, it still looks over-blurred 08:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using the smudge tool in GIMP? I know you said you used GIMP. Use the smudge tool on the white chest. The earpink looks a lot better! Maybe lighten it a bit more? 13:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Oh my, the texture didn't fail… Im insanely proud of this  00:42, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink a bit, and make it less neon-y? 00:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's not neon at all. It blends well perfectly with the fur. 01:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make it more pink than purple please. That's pretty much what Storm was asking, simplified. Just make it a lighter pink on the spectrum. Very nice^^ 13:51, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  17:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I just looked at the apprentice, and I think the patch on his chest is a tiiiiny bit smaller Correct me if I am wrong It could just be my screen though 07:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

But that is the apprentice, which is a smaller blank. 13:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the chest white is fine, so im not changing it yet  19:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's supposed to be small, so please shrink it. While the apprentice blanks are smaller, the patch of white you have on here is much too big.

Re~Upped Ok  22:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I actually saved the image and zoomed it in to see details, and I think I can see a black outline around the white chest and the bottom whisker. There's also a black hard-eged splotch on his back. I like him! Just try to see what I was talking about (might be just my screen) and blur the hind paws shading slightly^^ good job 14:13, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

That's actually normal "waste", per se. Define the light on the front paw closest? 18:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

How is it "waste"? It's on the pelt. 00:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, were you talking about on the warrior or apprentice image, Silver? 00:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I was talking about this warrior image. It could  be just my screen though 00:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Uh yeah... Here world  02:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's a lil bit of waste on the top of the nose; also, make the earpink more triangular. 15:35, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I like this. :)  01:16, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's still a somewhat outline around the white, is it just the shading? But the shading really shouldn't just go around the shape >.> 13:49, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Closest to le lineart or towards his body over there? ===>  14:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Idk, just around the white chest 11:43, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 00:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is still quite neon, and its quite small as well. Maybe expand the earpink back out a ways, and dull down the neon-ness. Make it more dull gray-ish pink, but still have a bit of brightness. 20:27, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Sunstream Strongly Dislikes Earpink. 00:36, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Curlfeather (W) - For Approval
Yippie! My first PCA charart! If i shoud make her shorthaired, let me know! 15:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Remove some of the shadow from her hind leg where it curls when she sits, as well as the knob of shadow at the back of her tail; it should be a straight shadow line. Also mind blurring the shadow a bit more? And define the light on the front and hind paw closest to us. 15:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading to the head as well. 16:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch and add a bit more light to the foreleg closest to us. If you want, there's a shading tutorial here 18:11, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more… triangular? And blur it more It might be just me, it looks a little too neon-y 22:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, sorry i haven't had a chance to reupload it yet, i'll do it first thing tomorrow. 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The light could be defined on all the legs tbh 05:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  14:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, use a hard edged blur tool at the rate of 100 14:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reupped- Yay! 14:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)'''

The shading seems to be... disconnected on the back, and it should be connected, so add some shading there. I hope that wasn't too confusing. Also, can you define the light on the legs? 15:13, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped I didn't change the light on the legs because that is how it looked on the shading placement. 15:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking all up his back and in other places too. Define the earpink as well. Sorry if I'm commenting too much. I really like this! 17:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more, please? It's difficult to see. 17:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back. If you're gonna add shading to the back and chest fur and tail, add some to the legs please. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 18:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped- Just re-did all of the shading. @Icebreeze, Don't worry, you can comment all you want :)  19:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, because now the shading is looking... green? I suggest that you shade in black and lower the opacity (you don't have to though) but at least make the shading less greenish. Blur the shading as well. I'm sorry I'm commenting again, you're probably getting really annoyed 20:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped Ugh it isint showing up… You are not annoying me don't worry   22:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lolp at first I thought her name was "Cerealfeather" for some reason :P I see that you're having some problems with the shading, maybe try to make the shading itself smoother, then blue it, if that makes any sense 09:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in and I see some waste around the image. Please remove it. User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:02, April, 20, 2015

Blur and maybe dull the shading a bit more. Also, there's a speck of waste at the very top of the image over the tail 18:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also there's still some shading on her hind leg where it curls when she sits that isn't connected to anything, so if you could get rid of that...? 22:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and then blur the shading more on them 07:52, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, will post soon... 15:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  18:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still need to get rid of the random shadow. It's like right by her underbelly, where the hind leg curls into it towards the knee (?) 18:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I've promoted you to an apprentice, and changed the file name. Caps are very important for these filenames- it should be File:Curlfeather.warrior.png.

Did you set your shading layer to multiply? It might help the shadows look a little more tinted to the base color and natural. If you just shade with black and lower the opacity, it might throw the color off a tad. It's just a suggestion, you don't have to go with it if you don't want 18:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the texture flower with the fur more? Can you lighten the shading? (If Ivy said this, Im sorry I couldn't understand what you said.. sorry  lel 19:42, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  01:41, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it still looks really hard edged 14:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  23:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 14:11, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and lighten the earpink? I can't really see it. 00:53, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped Sorry i did it but forgot to reupload. 00:00, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading and why is there a black spot on his muzzle? 10:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the black spot is shading, and if so, I don't think it should be there. 19:51, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

The color is leaking on ===> this ear, meaning its not all the way to the lineart. 20:25, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

My eyes see no black spot... 00:03, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped I also don't  00:25, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
What a traitor. 21:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I never read MV yet, so I can't agree with you xD Define the light on his tail-tip? 01:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the shading on the legs and define the ear pink just a little. Yes, Appledusk is a big mouse-brain and I was like too bad when he died 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 12:21, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There should be light on his chest, and I think the shading could be defined and blurred/smudged more. 17:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 18:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking on his tail-tip? 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Exactly I didn't read MV yet but when I saw he was killed my Mapleshade I went like "Beautiful job girl" blur the shading below the chin and the shading is leaking on the shoulder 15:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The shading was leaking in several other spots, too. 20:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I really hate this and I want to do something else, so I'm withdrawing. 23:39, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Even though im not officially in the PCA, can i take over? 23:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

You don't need to ask just reserve it

-ReUpped Ok, my turn. 03:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading way more and change the heading please 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his pelt color. 18:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, please. 23:29, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

here is the base colour for the warrior image. 04:27, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thanks for the colour, Stealthfire :)  01:34, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more until it blends perfectly with the pelt 01:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped Thankfully i was still online  01:48, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to blur the shading way more than that. Try to use a hard-edged blur tool with the rate of 100 (if you're using GIMP) and blur the edges only. 14:19, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink and define it on the other ear 19:27, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks cut off at the edges (by that I mean there's space between the shading and lineart). Fix that, please. Also, blur the shading a lot more. 21:36 Fri Apr 24

-ReUpped I tried texture too  15:01, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You'll need to remove the texture, sorry. His warrior image doesn't have it, and you need to match that.

Expand the ear-pink in --> this ear and blur/smooth the shading inside the ear 17:40, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Both of the earpinks need to be expanded. The earpink on this blank usually is literally the whole ear. And the shading is leaking a lot around his pelt. 00:52, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't need to be in the whole ear- that's just a preference that many of us do.

-ReUpped  23:49, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shading is still leaking in quite a few places 00:57, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, please try to be more specific when you're commenting. I'd say the shading on the part where the stomach meets the leg, and the neck are leaking away from the liner art. 02:53, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's also leaking on the stomach on <-- side of the tail-tip. 19:56, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

-ReUpped  23:55, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Its still leaking a liiittle bit on the shoulder by the underbelly and under the chin 00:04, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (W) - For Approval
Wheeee 8) 00:52, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty! Define the light on the tail? Also, you're an apprentice now, so shouldn't your heading say "for approval"? 01:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

lmao oopsies. re-upped. 01:42, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink. 03:20, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-upped. '''Noticed some waste between the third and fourth chest tufts, lmao dunno how I missed that. 13:55, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped again. Got rid of the paler chest/belly after some research. 14:15, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smooth out the shading on the neck/back/main part of the cat.

Reupped. 12:39, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink just a tad- then i think this can go for a CBA. 14:19, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped again. Had the texture layer hidden on accident, and Breezey I'll do that right after I get out of work lmao I'm cutting it close by uploading this real quick 14:22, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped 23:27, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? Anyone? 01:32, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly can't see the texture at all. Could you define it a lot? I was confused when texture was added to the other images, since I didn't think she had any...

Reupped. Texture was there, just wasn't dark enough. 01:51, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the feet towards the back of the cat, (like that back foot we can barely see anything of) and expand the haunch shading- it seems a tiny bit too thin. Could you also perhaps shift the ear pink so it's a tiny bit more on the gray side? This kinda looks a bit like bubble gum and might be making me hungry. =P

Reups ^^ 13:07, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Cricket (Ki) - CBA
ew on the stripes, but I did have a lot of fun making this. Everything should be the same as the rogue. 12:06, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes look fine imo. Add some shadow to the side of his face? Also define the shadow on his front legs and back paw. 12:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 10:38, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:31, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. 14:21, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

idk which day we're going on for uploads, since it did go almost three days without comments, but just to be safe, I'm gonna ask you if you're still working on this, Dark. I mean, I bet you are, but an extra nudge wouldn't hurt.

Re-uploaded. Haha yeah I am. Won't be able to reup again until the end of this week though. 23:44, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

No need to reupload again, imho. CBA?

Featherpelt (W) ~ For Approval
It's a rosetted tabby. 16:23 Sun Apr 19

It looks good!

Define the shading on the tail, both paws furthest from us, and perhaps on the haunch? Stunning work, Hawk. 16:35, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, isn't there an apprentice's image to match? Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I thought that but when I checked her page there wasn't anything... 16:57 Sun Apr 19

Ohh wait I found it... I'll redo it to match. 16:58 Sun Apr 19

Before I touch it Tiger has nominated her apprentice image so I'll hold off for now. 17:39 Sun Apr 19

This is amazing.Can yo define the shading on the back leg a bit? 19:50, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

She's sooooooooo gorgeous! But I think you should match the apprentice version not just because of the existing image - and because she needs to look more like Feathertail!!! :PPPPPP 09:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I dont think so, as the other one is being redone. Besides this character isnt Feathertail, shes her own character, even if shes named after Feathertail. --Russettail13 (talk) 12:11, April 20, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Umm, I was joking. 14:31, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Please be aware that if you don't have any critique to give, then please refrain from commenting. Discussions like this belong on talkpages, not the Approval Page. Define the shading on the front paw furthest from us- though it may just be my monitor, so feel free to disregard me if you think its alright.-- 16:56, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 07:47, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

If you don't mind me asking for clarification, define "smooth out" please. 1:32 Wed Apr 22</span

Define means bluR.--Russettail13 (talk) 01:38, April 22, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Actually, no, define means to make more visible. I was asking her to tell me what she meant by "smooth out". <span style="">1:39 Wed Apr 22


 * smooth out = blur and expand slightly, so it doesn't end so abruptly 03:23, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading looks gorgeous. Maybe smooth out the shading on the legs, though :P 15:07, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:36 Wed Apr 22

Please define the tail shading. Hawky, this is gorgeous 08:13, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm so jealous at your charart skills :P Btw doesn't this need to match her apprentice image? Anyway, define light on her forepaws :) 13:47, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

See, I'm not entirely sure which version has to match which. I mean, Tiger redid the apprentice after I had this posted, and she made a completely different pattern, so idk... do I match the app or does she match me? <span style="">0:04 Mon Apr 27

Define the tail shading a tad. I think Tiger has to match this one... --Russettail13 (talk) 12:01, April 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Russet, you have no say whether she has to match this one, or vice versa. You are not a part of the PCA anyway. Are you even allowed to talk on this page??? Sorry if I come off as rude, as I have been noted in the past ;-; As for the image, define the light on the ear farthest from us. 14:46, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Of course he can- you don't have to be apart of the project to give criticism or comment. And its actually the other way around. Tiger's image came first, regardless if its being redone or not. So Hawk needs to match hers, technically. Mind defining the earpink a tad?-- 20:03, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

In the meantime, Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:54 Mon Apr 27

That re-upload was for the previous comments. However, technically my image came before Tiger's pattern-wise, seen as she redid her image after I uploaded this, so...? <span style="">22:56 Mon Apr 27

Could you and Tiger please settle this down on your talk pages? I honestly think it could go both ways. 00:27, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Is it alright if you'd match my image, please? Sorry for not replying earlier. ^^ 12:51, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No problem. <span style="">23:58 Tue Apr 28

Sorrelstripe (App) ~ Withdrawn
Too much like chocolate? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

re-up its been a while, texture ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten her up a bit? She seems a bit too dark, nearly black. 18:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Her warrior image has a paler underbelly, I think you should add that in. 18:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I used a longhaired blank, so you might want to change that. And you need to add longhaired texture to her tail, flank, her cheeks, and legs. And as Raven said, I put in a paler muzzle, throat, chest, and underbelly. 20:01, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

If her description doesnt call for a paler belly then don't add it 11:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

A lot of things don't call for a paler belly, but everyone still adds them. Example is the above Owlnose. He's just a brown tabby tom, but yet the artist added in a paler muzzle, throat, chest, and paws. Isn't it the first artist's choice, at least until the book comes out and they can be tweaked? 13:50, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

except tabby cats almost always have paler muzzles and the like. 13:58, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I wasn't worried about her being chocoloate until you mentioned it. Anyway, she's cute!^^ I think you should lighten her color just a bit. And back to the nosepink problem. Does she have a pink nose?? (I hope she does :3)  and I expected her to be "striped"! Sorrelstripe. Yea. The Erins made her un-striped 14:28, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the color needs to be lightened a bit, because it needs to match her warrior image. Maybe color pick from that? Also I got rid of the paler underbelly on my image, so don't worry about it. 14:32, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up wow I forgot the longhiar.. just wait. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:14, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also I think some earpink is leaking onto the ear? 20:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 21:31, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on all four paws and define the eye depth? 22:17, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up idk 22:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading 12:57, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Don't forget to add my longhair texture. :3 00:33, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I'll fix the testure on the face. Just noticed it. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:22, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define facial shading, there probably should be as the shoulder and haunch are all-around-shaded? I just can't stop messing up Brambleshade and Burnt's signature. 13:00, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

I just had to darken my texture, so you gotta make yours more visible now >< 14:55, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing I feel as if I'm more comfortable with stripes then plain cats '-' ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 19:09, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Morning Whisker (Star) - CBA
all colors from the xcf 04:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lovely. Define head shading a touch? Russettail13 (talk) 12:03, April 21, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Re-uploaded Extremely difficult to define on the dark spots 13:26, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading just a tad. Lovely work. 22:11, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:52, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, please.

Re-uploaded 08:49, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please. 14:22, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:43, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading inside this <-- ear 17:42, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I didn't add too much because it is mostly in light 02:25, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Rippletail (W) ~ For Approval
Tell me if he needs to be shorthaired, and if I need to change the eye color 06:34, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the main body and define the light on the legs. 10:49, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Waste in le triangle hole :3 13:50, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading like Fox said, and lighten it a few ticks too. 19:17, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Also, when I was uploading I accidentally created a file named File:Rippletail (SC).warrior.gif could someone delete it for me? 21:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten and smooth out the shading a little more, please. Also, add some light to the legs and back ear, along with defining the ear pink. I have also eliminated the image you've requested me to.

Re-ups 07:45, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define it a little . It's way too light at the moment. 07:57, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups By define you mean shading right? 08:02, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shadow and light on all four paws/legs? 12:24, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 00:17, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, I cant see it well. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 12:46, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shadow to the hind legs, there should be some there. Also define the eye depth 00:49, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. I can't see it that much. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 11:59, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the color (of earpink), I'd just say don't blur it that much. 13:20, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - CBA
A little something before I return to studying for my genetics final. Color picked from kit image. 16:11, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more  18:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

His fur is looking a bit too yellow. Are you using yellow to brighten, instead of white? If that's the case, then replace it with white. Also define the earpink a bit more and brighten it. 18:54, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

reup I also smudged the highlight on the chest more. 19:55, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white on the tail a bit more and define the shading on it. Nicely done, Sunjaw! He matches beautifully and I'll make you an apprentice right away.

reup Thanks, Lightning! The tail tip just would not smudge as much as I wanted it to >.> ... 20:21, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. 01:21, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shadow to his haunches? Looking good! 01:50, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

reup Also adjusted the shading to a darker gray-tinted purple. If it looks off I'll change it back. :3 02:15, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body 04:20, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a smidge? 12:41, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

reup 14:22, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:20, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I love that tail shading there. Maybe smooth out/lighten the body shading? 13:38, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

reup Finally got my computer to stay connected to the internet long enough to put this up. Idk if the changes are showing though. '' Thanks to my roommate for overloading the wifi... '' 14:23, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Cloverfoot (W) ~ For Approval
I'm assuming I can post this now 20:07, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes some more, and define the light on the ear closest to us. Looks good 20:35, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you. I blurred the stripes a bit more. I don't think there's supposed to be light on that ear, I used the same light source on him and it was ok, but if someone else agrees I'll add some light. 20:48, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too paint brushy--try and smudge a tip onto them so they're not so uniform. Blur the shading on the back and tail and define the ear pink 21:12, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I wasn't totally sure about what you meant on the stripes, but I tried my best. 23:26, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink underneath the shading. Can you perhaps move it and define it?

Re-upped 12:04, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, please. 10:27, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 19:38, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paw farthest from us? 20:22, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:14, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (W) ~ For approval
I forgot to log out of my sister's account before I uploaded this, if it says Snowsplash uploaded it it's because of that 08:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit lighter,he looks black 12:06, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Same deal as Featherpelt - isn't there an apprentice image to match? Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:23, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, there is - File:Hootwhisker.apprentice.png. It needs to be renamed to Hootwhisker. Anyway, I made the apprentice, so it's gotta match. Do you want the xcf, Flame? 14:18, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, it looks hard edged. 22:53, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing sorry my art program crashed 23:30, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

im not part of the project, but i will take over. 19:37, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:13, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

First, the earpink is neon, so make it less neon-y. Second, blur the shading a lot. Finally, the shading seems to be cut off where the foreleg closest to us meets the body. This is a nice first image, though. 22:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

You've got to match the apprentice, so it needs texture. Do you want the xcf? If you're wondering how I did the texture, I made two layers - one with darker than the pelt, 1px size lines, the other with lighter than the pelt, in the gaps where the darker lines weren't. I took a small brush and smudged the lines on each layer. 23:14, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him darker. Hootwhisker is dark gray. Also add some shadow to the back of the ear farthest from us? And I don't know what it is, but there's a splotch of white on the line of his front leg on the back. 00:14, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I will post it in a few minuetes, just need to get rid of some waste. 01:14, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 13:28, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and check the edges where some shadingz leak. 13:35, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a teeny tiny bit and blur the shading, and define the shading on the ears. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:10, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Why do I think the ear pink looks rather neon? Is it just me? 22:55, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Adding onto what Foxy said, it does look neon. Maybe lighten/darken the earpink? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:45, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:36, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

You need to fix the texture. You need to match the apprentice file. Un smudge the shading 02:40, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the eye depth and the ear pink 02:43, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

The shading can be smudged if Moon wishes to do so. It doesn't matter if the other image has it or doesn't have it. That's just a shading style. The only thing that is required to match is the texture.

I was just saying the shading is looking too smudged, so he should un smudge it a smudge lol 02:48, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:34, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Add a little bit more shading to the back leg and smudge(?) the shading a tad. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:26, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere, define the earpink a tad, and there's some waste on top of his head 02:36, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the eye depth, please? 19:47, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Perchpaw (MV) (A) - CBA
dong ding 18:43, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded changed the shading a little cuz i wasnt happy with it 20:02, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light and shadow on all four paws/legs? 01:43, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

only the back legs need defining tbh, the front legs are fine 12:55, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded 08:30, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it - this looks too black to me. 12:26, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not going to lighten it, a shade is never specified. 12:40, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Mosspelt (E) - CBA
This was harder to match than it should have been 23:49, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink just a little more, please. 08:49, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Alrighty

Sexy old cat .O. Smooth out the shading at the part where the haunch meets the tail 10:43, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

^_^ 14:09, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Birch (Ro) - For Approval
well I did try — <span style="">Sat Apr 25 01:33

He looks amazing. Define the shadow on the underbelly? And the main flank? 01:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more >:V 01:44, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

reups take 2 — <span style="">Sat Apr 25 01:50

define the tail shading and smudge the ear pink a bit 12:54, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

How can you possibly do this. Maybe smooth out/lighten the shading a tad? 13:32, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Still working, Alex?

Sorrelstripe (K) ~ For Approval
wow I actually like this <span style="">00:09 Sun Apr 26

Cute! Can you smudge the dark brown lines on her? :) 01:04, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 10:44, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">13:13 Sun Apr 26

Cute. <3 that texture! Maybe move the earpink more up since it shouldn't be on her head? 13:29, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

I messed something up... 13:30, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 10:05, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">22:44 Tue Apr 28

Thistle (Ki) ~ For Approval
Can't tell whether I like this or hate this 21:30, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading. He's adorable! Russettail13 (talk) 21:46, April 26, 2015 (UTC) Russet

Possibly darken his pelt color a bit? Looks good! 00:57, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Why does she have to darken it? It looks perfectly ginger. 12:42, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups thanks, Russet ;) I thought that the pelt was fine as it was, so I left it. 15:31, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the base pelt a bit less golden and more orange?

Reups that should do it 15:00, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sparkpaw (K) ~ For Approval
asdfghjkl tiny kit is cute 08:01, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the forehead, if there is any. So ''adorable! She looks amazing'' so far, Burnt. :) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 12:04, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure if its just my computer but the stripes look a little hard edged. Russettail13 (talk) 12:06, April 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

They do look a little hard edged, but she looks fanta+stick! She seens kinda bright compared to her apprentice version, but I think it's just my screen. 12:35, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? 13:01, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you, Skid :D I color picked fom her other images, Silver so I think the color should match? Idk. there isn't forehead shading, so I just defined it on the head. 13:32, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

you have to be careful when you colourpick off the apprentice, ive got the same colour as the underside in the pelt as well as the base colour. 16:02, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the advice :D my base color is actually the color of the pale parts, I've noticed that while studying the apprentice image. 00:22, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail and head shading- I can't see either of them.

Re-upped 08:02, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and belly shading? 20:19, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Podlight (K) ~ For Approval
Ipodkit :3 19:21, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shadow on the tail, add some shadow between her legs on her belly and define the shadow on her back paw? 01:02, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:48, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Star) - For Approval
02:28, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on ==> that leg 10:04, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:12, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shape of the shading 08:14, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:35, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Puddlekit (K) - For Approval
Sad to have to withdraw Lionkit to do this one, but... Puddlekit. Anyway, is it bad that I had trouble matching my own pattern? :P I might make some tweaks later. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:17, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Nope, I had trouble matching Stormcloud. Anyway, define the shading on the side and the face (not the muzzle, the rest of the face and ear) 09:37, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:00, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

It might be me but I cant see the back paw shading. I may need my new glasses, but I can't find them

Tiny paws? check. Amazing smudged shading? check. Can I do this? nope. tell me your wizard magic. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 23:26, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Aw, thanks. :D The shading isn't smudged - it's just drawn with a really tiny brush and a high-ish opacity. ^^ I found it works better that way. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:51, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Beepaw (A) ~ For Approval
Does she look too gray?? The tail and haunch shading seem hard edged as well I'll change that on the next upload 10:21, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

She does look a bit gray, yeah. Are you using pure white for your base? If not, I highly suggest it. ^^

re-ups Oh, I used a pale pale gray instead. :P 12:26, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

===> this ear looks a bit too gray ish. Maybe darken it a bit or add some shadow? 13:14, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

I thikn it looks black. The gray might be the smudging, and I can't use pure black. 13:17, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's a bit too bright though. Try adding some shadow and if that doesn't look right then don't worry about it :p it looks lovely though! 13:22, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow?? I put the shading over the black... but still, re-ups though I can't see any difference. 13:25, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

It looks much better ^^. Also maybe define the light on the paws farthest from us? 13:30, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  14:10, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Possibly define the shadow on her tail and define the eye depth? >< sorry if I'm bothering you 14:56, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

'''re-ups~! ''' 15:09, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Waste on the tail. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 17:13, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  23:45, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Sweetbriar (Q) - For Approval
Are you my mummy, Sweetbriar? I'd rather not change the base pelt much, since the colors are taken from Lizardstripe, and pale/light are used interchangeably here.

I love this, Snowy! Smooth out some of the shadow on her back leg furthest from us? And maybe define the shadow on her face? 21:19, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also did some other things. I'm really loving this shading.

Define the shading on the back legs behind the belly? This is gorgeous, Skye! ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 23:24, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined it in a few other places too.

Under the belly area on the back legs, please? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 23:47, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. idk if that's what you were talking about.

I think she meant add some shading behind the belly on her hind leg. 02:08, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

I've used this source on every one of my queens so far and haven't needed shading there, so I'd like to wait before I add it- otherwise people are going to nominate my queens for unnecessary tweaking, like they did with my kits. >.>

Could you smudge the stripes a bit more? They look a bit too sharp 14:58, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

We have sharp-edged tabbies all the time, and no one's every had an issue with it. Plus, I think smudging these would ruin the pattern. I spefically based it off of Lizardstripe, and her stripes aren't really smudged at all. I'm not trying to be difficult, but I don't really want to change my pattern all that much, and smudging them would do that.

Lionkit (ki) ~ for approval
a gramhm cracker 18:44, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Looks great Beebs! Possibly smudge the chest white some more? 19:07, April 29, 2015 (UTC)