Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 156

Leopardstar (D Alt) - Approved
Killed it. Killed it. Killed it.

define shading everywhere but the tail? 18:28, 07/6/2016

Re-uploaded. I just redid the shading; much happier with it now.

Could you define the shading on the face please?  20:27 Thu Jul 7 

Re-uploaded.

Beautiful. CBA? 13:53, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Approved.

Tigerstar (D) - Approved
14:13, 07/7/2016

Is it just me or does he have two nose bridge scars? It looks weird, you should fix it up.

What? There's nothing there.... 00:22, 07/8/2016

Okay, but the shading here looks weird. (the part with the red circle) Click me

thats texture 01:08, 07/8/2016

reuploaded un-weirded it 01:14, 07/8/2016

CBA?

Approved.

Stonefur (D) - Approved
uugghhh... it's been a while since I did a blue-gray kitty 20:09, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and maybe expand it on the chest. 19:09, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:13, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Is there meant to be some light on the side of the belly? If there is, would you mind defining it a bit? 01:07, July 10, 2016 (UTC)


 * I didn't put any light on the belly 05:28, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Foxheart (D) - Approved
Any pattern tips would be appreciated.

It looks like the previous deputy image (which to my knowledge is also the first in the set), has a bit thinner and more... uh, what's the word I'm looking for? idk, but there seem to be more stripes on the other version than this one. It's hard for me to explain, but they seem more swirly and I'm so terrible at explaining these things. That seems to be a marble pattern, and heavy on the swirls, while this is less heavy.

Re-uploaded Better?

Much; I'm glad you understood what I meant. x.x CBA?

Approved.

Onestar (D) - Approved
I hate him 14:02, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Where are his pupils?

Looks like they're on --> side of the eye, instead of <-- side.

I don't think pupils look like that. Besides, this is the only one whose "pupils" are facing right. It should be left.

theyre fine and the eyes on these are artists choice. :/ 17:20, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.