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Chasing Clouds - For Approval
I will say that Moonpelt's version was very good, and I'll remember to put the rank after my charart next time. I guess I didn't think I needed it since Chasing Clouds has only one known rank. Anyways, comments?--Shaf Girl  23:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh...blur the shading on his gray parts and darken the shading on the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:46, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good....blur the gray. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred some line art on the ear. Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 13:51, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add some grey to the face. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:39, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart's blurred in several places. Raven flight 92 00:21, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more gray patches all over-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:27, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading on the gray parts, darken the white shading, fixed the blurred lineart on the ear and some other places, and added gray to the face and other parts.--Shaf Girl  02:14, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks weird. Quailflight 09:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's blurred a lot. Raven flight 92 23:00, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where exactly do you see it blurred? Maybe it's obvious to you, but I can't tell. My computer crashed a few days ago and I have limited time on my brother's computer, so I can't really look over to see exactly where it's blurred.--Shaf Girl  23:52, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Around the head and tail, I think. Raven flight 92 00:29, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to working on it soon.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:27, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If there are still blurred places, I can fix that. Also, any other problems?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:19, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * The lineart still looks blurred...maybe its this computer as its not my own. Its like fuzzy where it touches the color and it seems almost blurred to the gray patches. Blur the patches more too.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I went over all the fuzzy places and fixed them. Also blurred the patches into the white part a little more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * The white patches on the tail are very grey and the shading needs thickening and blending all over. ✐Sa  NdY  16:09, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:20, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * The shading on his gray patch on his back needs to be blurred more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:39, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:32, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:41, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add more grey to the back paws and make his ear more noticeable. FrostHeart 02:49, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you mean by "more noticeable." I can't change the lineart.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:21, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Frostheart meant earpink, which I agree could be a bit bigger. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:57, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  19:19, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bram ble  15:57, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry; but the shading looks very bumpy. Try blurring it more, (especially on th front leg closest to us) and it seems as if blurred lineart is causing the shading to look bumpy, perhaps smooth it out if it is Night  Fall 08:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (Q)-For Approval
This is one thing............. an epic fail. XP Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:32, Apr<font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:27, May 13, 2010 (UTC)il 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 00:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, and add a few to her legs  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:14, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

When I did darken the stripes, it didn't match her warrior image and messed the whole picture up. The stripes on the leg are there, you just can't see them very well because of the shading. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:09, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I still think that you should darken the stripes in the shaded area. The shading would darken the stripes. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 19:27, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened leg stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 22:15, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Keep blurring the stripes, because it looks like they've only been blurred over once. Here's a trick:

If it looks like it won't blur anymore, press the mouse again and keep repeating until the blurring is perfect. Quailflight 10:49, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes more. Comments? Snow storm  23:01, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes have no highlights- they seem to go over the shading and highlights you put- they look drawn on. Could you fix that? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   20:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I understand what you are saying. Do I have to redo the image? Or is there a way to fix it? Snow storm  20:53, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Well, acually Mouse, that's the way I do my tabbies. I do the shading and highlights first, then I do the stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

A lot of people do that but it only works if you use the burn tool for stripes. You should do the stripes first if you paint them on. As for the image if you're careful you can just highlight that area. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 13:30, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I used the pencil tool to put the stripes on :3 What should I do? I also did it the way Night did it. Is it ok? Snow storm  18:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading again. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:15, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I never darkened the shading before, and if I do the stripes wont be visible. Snow storm  03:05, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:31, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Snow  storm  23:55, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:27, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I won't blur anymore. Snow storm  16:44, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * I blurred it a touch for you (if you don't like it then revert it), but you're right; to do so any more would blur it right into the pelt and it wouldn't be seen. I think you've done a great job with this. -- Sandy star 11:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you, Sandy :3 I thought I would fail because this was my first tabby. Thank you, also, for blurring it. Snow storm

14:37, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

So is this in CBA? Snow storm  01:57, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. Make the earpink a tad bigger and then it'll be ready for sure. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  02:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Highlight the tail. And make the ear more pink. Great job :]FrostHeart 02:50, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is fine.You could make the ear pink a little more noticeable though.Awesome job! =)  S n i c k e r s   7 Days! 19:33, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

If I make it any bigger, it would look unnatural. Snow storm  02:16, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more-- Night s h i n e   R  02:58, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (A) - For Approval


I don't like Robinwing, so I erased it. I'm at school, so this isn't finished..-- ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  03:06, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

As I believe has been said numerous times before, you never blank a section; you put 'withdrawn' in place of 'for approval' and let one of the senior team archive it. You never erase it. I also uploaded your image in accordance with the new naming policy; Tallpoppy.apprentice. Your image isn't finished yet, so I'll hold my comments for now. -- Bram ble  03:33, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, this looks like a speckled (whatever LOL) cat and here description says tabby, add some color to the eye, add some shading and highlights if you want to, akso some ear pink, and blur the markings after you make them tabby stripes. (sorry if they are tabby stripes : Add stripes to the tail, the foreleg thats farthest away from us, some on thee tail, and some on the back leg closes to us. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   13:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's not done with the image; in her first message it says that she was at school when she did it.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:59, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

School again Reuploaded ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  03:08, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken her pelt and the shading some. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:02, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

She looks too golden, make her a brown color like her elder and queen images  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:09, May 20, 2010 (UTC)


 * Don't forget to add the ear pink and color in the eyes.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:23, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * She looks too golden, and the tabby stripes seem too weird. And make the ear pink. FrostHeart 02:51, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * The ear does have earpink in it, it just is hard to see. S n i c k e r s   7 Days! 19:34, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  13:03, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, keep your"skin" on, reuploaded! ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  12:57, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ivypool, there's not need to talk to us like that. You have seven days to reupload your chararts before the decline warning is put on them. Ashshadow did just this. She's still too golden, and she doesn't have blue eyes; she has amber Night  Fall 18:55, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Adderfang (D) - For Approval
Hey, guys! Sorry for not contributing to the project lately. =P Our computer broke down a couple months ago, and I've been using my mom's laptop ever since. I thought Pixlr wouldn't really work well on her computer, but I think Adderfang turned out alright. What do you guys think? Oh, and also, I drastically changed his deputy image from his warrior image because I was planning to re-do his warrior image during the next tweak week. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:43, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I'm not sure you can totally re-do another person's image, even for Tweak Week. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:45, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Could someone remind me when he was deputy? I don't remember that; but I guess I could have overlooked it in BP  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

He wasn't. Sunstar's only deputies were Tawnyspots and Bluefur, and Bluestar's deputy was Redtail up until his death. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 01:03, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Huh; where did we get that he was a deputy I wonder? Oh well. Sorry, Honeyfur; is there another cat you can use this as?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:46, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

He was temporary deputy for a while. Kinda like you Night. He filled in while Tawnyspots was sick. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:49, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I was the one who did Adderfang's warrior image, so that was why I was planning to re-do him. Also, when Tawnyspots was sick, Adderfang filled in for him, so he was a temporary deputy. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 10:57, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the chest area. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? And also, I'm really sorry for causing all this confusion; if Adderfang doesn't work out, I could always choose a different cat. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. This is really good!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:17, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Snowflight! I actually re-located the highlight. Is it blurred enough? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:44, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great to me. -- Sandy star 21:28, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bram ble  10:27, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes and earpink could be blurred more. Quailflight 05:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights can be blured a little more too.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:56, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blur tool is kind of weak, but I tried to make it work. How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:04, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't this look more like his warrior image? The colours on this one are all different and so are the stripes. I prefer the style of his warrior image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   06:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

She said that she wanted to redo his warrior image during tweak week. I dont think that the colors are different but the highlights make them look different. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:55, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I used the exact same coloring for his deputy image; I guess the shading and highlights just make it look different. I personally think his warrior image doesn't look very good, but I can always re-do him. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 23:14, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I personally like this style better. Stripes aside make the earpink a little bigger. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:16, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, Ashshadow! Made the ear pink bigger. And I'm sorry, Nightshine. Is there anything I should do to make his stripes look better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:42, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you can change the spots into stripes. They looks kind of strange at the moment-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   06:23, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Highlight the tail and legs. FrostHeart 02:56, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

No Frostheart, the legs and tail don't need highlighting. I would change the spots into stripes if I were you Honeyfur. Quailflight 09:23, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Hold on, guys. I've just re-read Bluestar's Prophecy. Adderfang is a mottled tabby tom. I think the spots should stay. I think they look nice, but the shading on the foreleg could be blurred. His warrior image should have mottled marks too. Holly dapple  03:14, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Here, I did an image of him with stripes. We can compare the two and see which would work better. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 19:53, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I still like the one at the top of the page best. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:49, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I totally and 100% vote for the first Adderfang. The one on top is so pretty with the spots! Holly dapple  01:59, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Voletooth (A)--For Approval


Revised Again! Any comments?Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is my 1st charart and I went off of the tutorial pages. Can you help me make this better? Hawkfur7 04:45, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the paint and blur messed up the lineart and I don't know how to fix it. Suggestions?Hawkfur7 04:57, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Layer over another line art. This is really good for your first charart! The eye colour needs to be fixed-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:00, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Adding to that, the image is a little too red. Copy the colour from his elder image and use that-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:06, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the eyes a lighter shade of green? Is that what you meant? Because I based his eyes off of his warrior picture.Hawkfur7 05:16, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

If I'm making him his elder color, do you want me to make the stripes a darker brown or keep them as is?Hawkfur7 05:25, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Use all the colours from his elder image. For the way the eye should look go here and look under the eye section-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:23, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a more natural color. Sil ver paw Chase that mouse!  19:03, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Not bad for a first image :) First thing first, the eyes don't have their line art anymore and most of our images keep their lineart of the eyes. When you re-add the lineart like Nightshine said, you should good to go with that. Make the ear pink the same color as his warrior and elder image. His colors look closer to his warrior image so it seems fine, but of course those don't technically match the color of his elder image as they're lighter. Then there's the highlights on his tail, just burn those a little as they're too bright against the rest of his fur.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:04, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * How about now?Hawkfur7 04:10, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg. Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg. Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Converting might not help...and I just noticed that you named the file wrong too. Change it too Voletooth.apprentice.png if I'm correct I believe--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:37, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, the weird thing is, I did save it as a png file, not a jpg. But, I resaved and renamed as a png file, just to be sure. It should be fine now.Hawkfur7 05:41, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * I also made him more of his elder colors, but lighter. And I fixed the lineart on his body and on his eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 05:49, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

He stills looks .jpg...I'm afraid even I have never found a way to undo this. However, I got the reverted version here:

Now I suggest just redoing him with this one, that way you won't have to start from scratch--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:53, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

How do you layer over another line art? Because I'm using Pixlr, and everytime I add a layer, it just deletes the one I was working on.Hawkfur7 06:11, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. I figured it out how to layer over another lineart using GIMP2.Hawkfur7 19:40, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I reuploaded the modified png image you posted, and it's at the top. Better?Hawkfur7 02:16, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hello...? :(Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anyone there?...Hawkfur7 09:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. Blur the ear pink just slightly more, but other than that it looks great! : Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:10, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''At the top. I blurred the ear pink more. Is it good to go?Hawkfur7 21:50, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to ask Bramble, but it looks good to me! Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:55, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye and add stripes to the tail. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:00, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''at the very top. I added stripes to the tail and fixed the eyes a little. How is it now?Hawkfur7 02:09, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. at the very top. I also brightened/darkened him with the burn/dodge tool, just to give him a little more depth.Hawkfur7 05:32, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try using This to see a way to do eyes. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:16, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 06:51, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made his spine a little darker to add depth and around his haunches. Now, how is it?Hawkfur7 05:30, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The eye still seems off to me. It's too square. Besides that darken the shadinag on the legs faruthest from us. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:21, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe on his head, and make the shorter stripes longer. Also, highlight the tail and front legs. FrostHeart 02:57, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, the highlights are unessessary. Quailflight 09:25, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. how about now?

It looks like there is blurred line art around the tail. Fix the eye again.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:25, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Are the eyes better? I also fixed most of the problem areas on the tail.Hawkfur7 21:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I also blurred the stripes a little more because they seemed to bold.Hawkfur7 21:50, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the ear pink, the eyes, the stripes, and the tail. Are there any more mistakes? Comments?Hawkfur7 05:49, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Look Here for a tutorial on eyes.The rest of the image is nice though! $ Coolstar  $  19:05, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I finally fixed the eyes! How is the ihis flankmage now?Hawkfur7 07:03, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Much better.There are two little dots on his flank... $ Coolstar  $  19:58, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I removed the two dots from his flank and covered it up the most I can. How is he now?Hawkfur7 04:29, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I put more stripes on his flank to cover up the removal of the two dots.Hawkfur7 00:11, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Nice Job. I think he's ready. CBA? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  00:18, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W)-For Approval
Well, this is my first charart, and I think it came out pretty well. Any comments? River pelt  23:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

That is REALLY GOOD! Try to make his bottom jaw look... strange. Almost like broken, okay? That's how it's supposed to be! But seriously, it looks nice. Shadowstream 11:22, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made the jaw look as crooked as i could. Riverpelt 18:04, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The line art is really blurred. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:54, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The jaw needs to look like. And the lineart is really blurred. -- 雨 晶須  22:18, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! '''Reuploaded. '''How's that, or do I need to sharpen the line art a bit more? River pelt  22:29, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes you should. And try expanding the beige on his nect more, and also add sharper edges to the tabby stripes.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  02:24, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

That is awesome! Jut sharpen the tabby a little like Mousetalon said. And try to make his fur an almost red color, like the leader charart. Shadowstream 12:07, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I tried to sharpen the line art more, fixed the beige on his neck, sharpened the tabby markings, and made his fur a red color. Hold on I have to blur the tabby marks more.'''Reuploaded. '''How's this? River pelt  12:54, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

....The whole image looks blurred likes he's just super FUZZY.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:58, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry! I'll redo it completely! River pelt  23:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid the entire charart! Is this any better? River pelt  00:10, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

The pink still isn't hitting it....and you have bits and pieces of gray surrounding the image. They possibly came from editing the image and unable to see it as the image is transparent. I uploaded an image to show, but this image isn't transparent so don't try editing it. Just use it as a reference. I also included the ear pink from his deputy image.
 * Much better...now lets begin. The ear pink needs to lighter as its too dark/bright and it doesn't match his deputy image one as you can see above. He's also missing a patch of tan fur on his front forepaw. The tabby stripes need to be blurred tremindously.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:00, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks Shimmerpool! Reuploaded. Oops I need to blur the stripes a bit more. Reuploaded. How's this? River  pelt  11:49, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded. I cleared out the gray spots and made the ear pink the same color as the deputy's ear pink. River pelt  23:07, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, fix the line art on the muzzle, blur the stripes more and lengthen the cream coloured throat-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:51, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... '''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the line art, blurred the stripes, and lengthened the cream-colored throat. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:37, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks as if half his nose was cut off  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the stripes in more. You see how they're supper smoothed in almost like fadded into hsi fur on the deputy image? Also I think some highlights would be nice. Just add them to the same place as his deputy image. :)--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:53, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded.  Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:44, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the nose. Anything else? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 18:18, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the pelt a little bit. It seems a bit light. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:19, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It's a bit darker now. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 23:48, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The nose still doesn't look quite right; the lineart is gray at the tip  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:14, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the nose a bit, and cleared away the gray lineart. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:15, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

The muzzle line art looks cut off-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:37, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

What do u mean about the line art being cut off? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 13:43, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think she means that it looks flat. It's more rounded in his other images. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:10, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The beige stripe on his throat is a little to thick at the bottom. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching... 13:23, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Any more comments? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 22:08, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reshape his ear and highlight the tail.

The ear pink looks fine to me, but Frostheart is right about highlighting the tail. Frostheart, always remember to sign after you leave a comment  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:15, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is highlighted, its just a bit dull. Do u mean brighten the highlight on the tail? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:43, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I brightened the highlights on the tail, if that's what you wanted me to do. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:10, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Any more comments? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:56, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the muzzle line art more. Some of the line art looks blurred. Blur the ear pink. Make the stripes a little sharper-- Night s h i n e   R  03:02, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How's this? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 13:02, May 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * The highlights look like you've overdone them; too bright and not blurred. The ear pink needs to be more triangular, slightly more reddish and blurred and the stripes/differently coloured fur needs blending also. -- Sandy star 18:31, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Uh, I'm almost ready to withdraw him, but not yet! Is this any better? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 17:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Don't give up River. It's getting there. Remaking tabbies has to be the hardest thing in charart. Lighten the stripes some. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:59, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Ashshadow, and yes tabbies are hard, but I lightened his stripes. Any more comments? And could somebody give me a few pointers about tabbies. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)


 * The ear pink could be blurred just a tad more and there's something about the stripes thats bothering me..lighten them so more I believe. I know how you feel, Squirrelflight was my first image and we all know she's a tabby. So many moons ago that has been and I learned alot from just looking at others styles. But remember tabbies have so many different patterns so if you're doing one who doesn't have an image let your imagination soar, but since he must live up to his previous image its best to lay the images side by side on your desktop and work with your image and compare it to the other. My best advice is after you done practice with making your own charries but you don't have to upload them, just compare them to someone elses image and ask yourself: Is the ear too dark? Are the stripes blurred in enough? Did I smudge the lineart? Eventually it'll come very easy to you :)--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:32, May 31, 2010 (UTC)


 * Also possibly try the fade out with your blurring as the taill seems too crowded and dark--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 02:22, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks Shimmerpool for the advice! =) So how's this? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 22:19, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Layer on another line art. The colours don't look correct. Thicken the muzzle line art more-- Night s h i n e   R  06:08, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay guys, I'm gonna redo this completely, because I think I know what I did wrong, okay? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I just got GIMP but it's not letting me color, it's keeping the color black! can someone help me? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:01, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I figured it out! sorry! Since I have GIMP now, does it look any better? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 22:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are perfect now, but he's too dark and so is the ear pink. You need to blur in the higlights as well. You almost missed the tan part on his leg again. After fixing the shading you might have to blur in the stripes again.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 00:45, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
There are a lot of discussions, and this is section 36, so this should be under the limit, but if it's over then please let me know. Image-wise, this is by far fail. I know that the stripes are way too dark, but when I lighten them you can't see them. Comments and suggestions? 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 02:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, just blur the tabby stripes a little more. =) Poppystorm Flight of an Eagle 18:00, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 6   Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 23:39, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good! Darken the paw and head shading a tiny bit, and blur the ear pink on the left a bit. -- Icestorm Peace 00:22, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Our left, or the left ear? 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 22:24, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Left ear. -- Icestorm Peace 11:43, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. This is great!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  15:57, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it's been a while. 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Last week of school! 21:16, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Everythings good, just highlight the front paws FrostHeart 03:02, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

My shading style has the paws with darker shading rather than with highlights, so I don't think I need to add them, but if I should then I will. Also, please put a link to your user page in your sig. 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Last week of school! 23:41, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Ice, the paws look fine. You don't need to add them. Blur the highlights again. Quailflight 09:27, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't fixed it yet, I haven't had time, but I'll work on it and upload it and a couple of days, so please don't decline this yet. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 03:00, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm soo sorry that I took so long to upload this, I've had Drum Camp this week. I've still got two more days left, but I hope to be able to get on more after that. I darkened the highlights rather than blurring them anymore, because I couldn't blur the highlights anymore without blurring the stripes, too, and having them blurred at different amounts. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 01:13, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is to darken the shading on his hind paw Night  Fall 05:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) -- For Approval
This probably isn't my best charar ever, but anyway, comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  22:51, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good. ^-^ I'd say to darken the shading and lighten the highlights because I can't really see them, but this is trully fabulous. ;)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 21:44, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading and lightened highlights, better?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:23, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. :)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 23:18, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the bit of shading on the tail tip and also blur the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:49, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ear pink and tail tip shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:30, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:33, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading overlaps the highlights, but it needs to be a smooth connection. Try blurring the transition some. 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 19:00, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the places where the brown touches the white.

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long, comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:27, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition on the fore arm-- Night s h i n e   R  03:07, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred fore arm transition. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  12:29, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think there's some blurred lineart at the very end of the transition between brown and white on our right end of the tail. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 14:28, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I couldn't find it (if I was looking at the right section...)-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  01:10, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white parts some more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:51, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) For Approval
fail,fail,such a fail.The sun is the left corner not the right.That's why the shading is on the bottom. S n i c k e r s 11 Days! 23:35, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to resave the blank. Here:



Also, look at a turtorial for the eyes. And I can't see much shading.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:54, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I resized it:

It's going to need to be blurred a lot more to look like her other images and shading. Dark hallows 01:44, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blurring tool is very bad,but I'll try. S n i c k e r s  8 Days! 21:09, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

CoughUseGIMPcoughcough ;) The blurring tool is at least twice as strong as pixlr's. insane  brick'd 21:39, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thats's why I don't use Pixlr... GIMP is so much better (I also have photoshop, but never use it...) Dark hallows 23:12, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to get on any art program for a couple days....Dunno why.Give me ummm 4 days. S n i c k e r s  7 Days! 18:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more. And the line art is messed up at the eye area. FrostHeart 03:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said, I'll try to blur it more. S n i c k e r s   7 Days! 19:45, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  S n i c k e r s   3 Days! Whoohoo! 19:46, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr is fine and is in my opinion better the GIMP once you know how to use it properly. I'll make a tutorial in a day or so showing you how. xD For the image: Blur the hgihlights some more. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:06, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Will do. $ Coolstar  $  19:50, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Needs to be blurred and smudged some more to look like her elder and warrior image, try going for a smoother effect :) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 00:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Rrrr. Pixlr froze when I opened it.Not again. =( I'll keep trying to get it to work. ~ Blue Lightning Strikes! I'm so shocked  11:42, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Snickers Oh the simpleness of simple stuff  13:10, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Birdy (For Approval)
Here's Birdy from The Lost Warriors manga trilogy. I saw her listed on Nightfall's list of cats that needed images as a kittypet, so I reserved her. She's my first cat, and I like her especially because we almost named one of our cats "Birdy" :). So, comments? See anything that I might work on? Holly  dapple  05:05, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not really sure if she would need a kittypet image since this blank is used for adult kittypets and she was a kit. If needed take the earpink out of thr right (our right) ear and this doesn't look much like her kit image. The image on a whole is really good. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:22, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Ashshadow, and you should add a white pixel to both of her eyes. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 14:35, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with both of you, actually, but I did her picture because she was listed on Nightfall's list of cats that needed pictures, quote "Birdy: Kittypet Image Needed". Check it out for yourselves. I fixed the pixel and tried to make it more like her kit--I added a gray splotch to her tail, I made her forepaw and hindpaw gray, and I ajusted the eyecolor--and added the white pixel (I can't believe I forgot that...). How do I re-upload the picture? Thanks. Holly dapple  17:42, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I know that it was listed as needing a kittypet image but people do make mistakes and im not sure if she meeds an adult image. That happened with Berrynose,Hazeltail, and Mousewhisker needing loner images. Anyway the way the image is facing the part you have white whoud actually be gray and gray partly white. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:11, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I'm not sure I got her in the right spot...anyway, I added the eye-white, as you can see, a splotch to the tail, and I made her tag gold so you can see it better. I see your point, Ashshadow, but even if I do withdraw/get it declined, I'd like to get her right (it's too bad we don't have kit blanks for kittypet/loner/rogue/Tribe kits). Anyway, does she need to be even gray-er? I think I got the splotch on the face right, but do you think I should ad more gray around the hindleg, foreleg, and that spot on the flank? Holly dapple  18:38, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail. Darken the arm, tail and face shading. Add more white to the eyes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:32, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm very sorry if I did make a mistake. However, Firestar has a kittypet image; but he was a kit when he was a kittypet  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:45, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I thought he was apprentice age. Thats what he joined the clan as. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:52, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

But an apprentice still isn't an adult  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:54, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I know but its not really a kit either. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:56, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the white blotches and define the ear to a more triangle shape. FrostHeart 20:13, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry about it, Nightfall; I have fun doing the chararts, whether it's just a pixel of the real Hollydapple (my weird cat Gertie), or if it's a pixel for approval! ;) You have a point about the Firestar-kittypet thing. I have this remark posted earlier--it's too bad we don't have kit blanks for kittypet/loner/rogue/Tribe cats. I'll fix the ear pink and I'll try adding more shading to the white splotches in a minute, FrostHeart. The ear pink does look kinda funky right now. *Snickers embarrassedly*. Holly  dapple  23:09, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well acually, kit blanks can be used for any blank there is. See Frisk, and Tadpole for example. And acually, I was going to do Firestar's kit image; a kit with a collar drawn on it like Scourge's. But I changed my mind at the time, I don't remember why though xD  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Point taken. Fixed the ear pink and added a few pixels more of eye-white. I tried darkening the shading, but it looks kind of funky. Lemme try blurring it more in Adobe Photoshop 8. They have a great blurring tool. If it works, I'll try uploading again here. Holly dapple  23:57, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Adobe Photoshop 8's blurring tool worked well, I think. Do you think I ought to smudge the head patch more? I think she looks better now than she did the last time I re-uploaded her. Holly dapple  00:10, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but the small ball next to the kittypet chain needs to be colored gold or yellow. FrostHeart 03:10, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I thought I had already fixed that. I must have forgotten to save my changes. I did it silver first because there aren't a lot of kittypets (that I've seen, anyway) with silver tags. But it sort of smudges in. I made the tag bronze-colored. Should I try lightening it some more? I also darkened the nose, so it doesn't look so baby-pink. Holly dapple  18:25, May 25, 2010(UTC)

Just so everyone knows what I mean, when I said "but it sort of smudges in", I meant the silver tag camoflauges with the gray-and-white pelt, not that the silver tag smudged in with the charart. I didn't word that the right way; sorry! :) Holly  dapple  18:38, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I felt like working on Birdy tonight. *Yawns sleepily*. I fixed a few minor things that were minor, but showed up, if you know what I mean. Anyway...not much else to report. Goodnight. Holly dapple  05:28, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

She's really good. Just darken the ear pink a tad, make it smaller, and blur it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 01:04, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks, Icestorm! I looked at a tutorial to work on the ear pink, and made it match the gray more, so now it's darker and more of a salmon-pink than a pink-pink. Is the size and blurring any better? I think the ear pink does look better now. Holly dapple  21:07, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes don't look right to me. Make the white pixels over lap the pupil-- Night s h i n e   R  17:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I made another copy of Birdy with "new eyes" (I looked at Rose's eyes for reference), but I think it looks strange. To me, her pupils look dialated in a weird way, and it makes her nose look bigger. Can I post a seperate version of Birdy down here so you can see which one looks better? Holly dapple  23:37, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, guys, I just needed to let you know that, as my computer is new, it has to go get some stuff done to it, so I will be without a computer for an undetermined period of time, though it should be back soon. Anyway...just be patient with me. Thanks. Holly dapple  01:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Change of plans. The computer won't go to get stuff installed on it, so I will have it for a few more days/a week, though I will be without a computer with a few days sometime in the near future. Anyways, I'll re-upload her in a sec (I see a few things that are bugging me...). Holly dapple  02:05, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I fixed some blurred lineart. You guys probably won't notice it--they weren't big blurs--but I saw them when I was commenting last, and I went, "oh, I need to fix that". Let me know if it looks weird, because my eyes are going nuts right now from my stupid seasonal allergies. Holly dapple  02:18, June 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * The gray patches where it meets the white on her legs from her back look smudged instead of blurred.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 15:37, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * Re-uploaded. I saw what you meant, Shimmerpool. I blurred where the patch meets the smudge, if that makes any sense to you. Any better? Holly  dapple  01:24, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers For Approval.
I think this is my best charart yet! How can I improve it? Clarrissa My Talk!16:30, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten his pelt some and add/darken the shading. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  16:37, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not some...a lot my friend. Its really close to the regular black of the lineart so when shading it wouldn't work out too well. Also darken the ear pink some.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:11, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Clarrissa, you'll have to redo the image, as trying to lighten it won't do much good. I suggest you color it with this color: #343434. 雨 晶須  17:34, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but I don't see any work done but the pelt color, the eye and the ear. You'll have the tweek or redo the image a lot. FrostHeart 03:13, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did what what you told me too. I hope it's better. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 19:06, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think Dark Whiskers is supposed to be black, this is completely gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:50, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Try #11111 instead. I've tested it out myself. You can still see the lineart clearly on it, but it it still looks like a black cat. It ought to work for Dark Whiskers. Holly dapple  18:24, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

If you don't want to completely re-do it, just run the burn tool over it and then fix the eye.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  02:45, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

I tried #11111, and it turned greenish. Shall i just use the burn tool? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:30, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes and darken the shading while you're at it. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:50, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Clarrissa, I left you the wrong number! It's six ones, not five. Sorry, that was my fault. It's #111111. The shading could be darkened. Sorry again! Holly dapple  20:32, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

She doesn't have to change the color, that's way to confusing. All she has to do is run the burn tool over it a few times Night  Fall 22:37, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it more reddish-- Night s h i n e   R  06:34, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) For Approval
Here is My first Character Art! I know its not as good as somew of the other ones, but its my first offer. Jayfire Blind Fire 15:22, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights and shading. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:42, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights aren't really necessary. However, Riverpelt is right about the shading. Look at these tutorials, they'll help you with shading; and highlights if you want to do them :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:47, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? i added some shading like you said. Jayfire Blind Fire 15:22, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blend it in a bit more. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 01:28, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? I blended the shading more. Jayfire Blind Fire 15:22, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

That looks good, but just blend it in a bit more like where the paws and the chest are. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 00:34, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is That better? Jayfire Blind Fire 15:03, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

i think its me but just to be sure the paws are a lighter grat then the base color or is that because of the stripes? Birdwing 19:33, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Its just from shading the stripes. Jayfire Blind Fire 21:24, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oh ok its ok then Birdwing 23:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more red coloured. Some line art looks blurred. Make the stripes sharper and more like his deputy image-- Night s h i n e   R  01:53, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W) For Approval
So here he is. He's my first one, so I know he's not that great, but what do you think? Let me know if this is under the limit; I think it is, but I'm not sure. Skydragon 18:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow this is really good perhaps where you put the stripe below his ear you should've put another stripe as on his leader image he has two grey stripes either side. Hope that helps :D :)Wildear~101:) 18:32, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but the file needs to be named Gorsestar.warrior.png. Jpg files dont have the best quality and look pixilated. Besides that darken the shading a bit. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice :) Thicken the stripes a bit, in addition to what Wildear and Ashshadow have said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is this better? Skydragon 21:30, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It still looked funny to me, so I fixed it again. Skydragon 18:24, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few more stripes on his haunch and tail and thicken them a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  01:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I don't think he has any more stripes on his tail in his leader image. Is this better though? Skydragon Ride the wind.... 02:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Move the tail stripes up more. Lengthen the stripes on his haunch a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:32, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Lengthened the stripes and moved the ones on his tail. Skydragon Ride the wind.... 17:52, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and this should be ready-- Night s h i n e   R  06:33, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the shading. Skydragon Listen...the wind is singing... 14:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice, Skydragon! There's just one thing that's bugging me; on the first tabby stripe going down the back, there's a pixel that sits in between the Y fold. Does that make any sense to you? Holly dapple  01:54, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight (W)-For Approval


This is my last Charat before I leave PCA. I think it has changed for the worst and I think to truely fullfill that promise I made back when PCA 'closed', I must work hard at Project Characters. To be a good user ti is not about PCA, as most users think. So I will be leaving after this. Sorry to Bramble, but I don't think PCA is as good as it was when I first joined. :( Hope you like Briarlight, I tried to make her my best ever. Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:55, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is good Fawny :) maybe just blur the ear pink and little more. Shruggy talk 16:03, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:10, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Though, her pelt is a bit to light, darken it a bit, and blur the ear pink. :) Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 17:32, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Beautifu work, Fawnstorm! The lineart looks great. The only thing that bothers me is the lineart on the front leg facing us, where it goes up into the body seems a tad long. Does that make any sense...? Other than that, it looks ''brilliant. ''We'll miss seeing your work, Fawnstorm! Holly dapple  18:12, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

We had the line art approved before she used it, so it should be fine.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:29, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. Now that I'm looking at it again a little more technically, it looks fine. Holly dapple  05:09, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thnaks guys. Made it darker. xD Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:10, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. I can barely see any-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:25, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - I can see the shading fine myself - maybe it's just your computer Night. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:54, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm. Does anyone else not see much shading?-- Night s h i n e   R  18:00, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the shading fine; just darken it on the front leg farthest from us, the back leg farthest from us, and the tail Night  Fall 21:10, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Weird, I hardly see any. But I can see shading fine on other chararts.-- Night s h i n e   R  21:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

So am I darkening the shading or not? I'm confuzzled. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:03, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Just a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  05:26, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

The shading? Sorry, Night(s), I'm really confused... Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:10, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the shading-- Night s h i n e   R  06:33, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Runningwind--Kit for Approval


Okay, I counted a lot of discussions on this page, so I don't think this counts as 39, but instead it counts as 34? If the discussions do count, feel free to achive/delete this. Plus I didn't see anyone reserving this image, so I think I'm okay, otherwise lemme know right away. Anyway, here is Runningwind as a kit. I just got done rereading Bluestar's Prophecy for the 4th time and I checked Runningwind's page and realized he didn't have a kit image. So I thought I'd put this up for approval. Heh, ear-pink = fail. Anyway, comments? Poppystorm Flight of an Eagle 22:23, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

You don't have this reserved. But it is a very good image. Blur the stripes more-- Night s h i n e   R  22:40, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, er, how do I reserve it? Just wondering. Poppystorm Flight of an Eagle 23:16, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

On the main project page there is a chart. I already reserved it for you though.-- Night s h i n e   R  23:26, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, what else should I fix? Poppystorm Flight of an Eagle 17:30, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything that really needs fixing. Good Job, Poppystorm! Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:44, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

In the image name, please change the _ into a "period". Also, the stripes on the legs are too thick. -- Quailflight 20:52, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken face stripes and blur all the stripes more-- Night s h i n e   R  20:54, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Bird That Rides the Wind (Ro)- For Approval


This is the 35th I think. If it isnt, than decline it. But anyways this IS my first charart! i feel proud of it! Is there anything I need to improve?Rubyblaze 22:34, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Blur the mud streaks. Darken the ear pink and nose colour. The line art looks a little blurred-- Night s h i n e   R  22:48, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Smudged the mud streaksRubyblaze 22:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to fix the line art and darken the nose colour and ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  23:01, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- darkened the ear and nose color.Rubyblaze 23:14, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like a jpeg. Convert into png and name it BirdThatRidestheWind.rogue -- Quailflight 23:16, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It actually is png right now. It just looks pixelated for some reason. Fix the line art and make the mud streaks a little more blurred-- Night s h i n e   R  23:23, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay. I am having trouble with the line art with I fixed the mud streaks.Rubyblaze 23:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can help. Can you please stop putting the image into a thumbnail?-- Night s h i n e   R  00:04, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed line art-- Night s h i n e   R  00:48, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. Sorry. I thought that was the way you were suppose to do. *turns pink* Is there anything else I need to do?Rubyblaze 01:04, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes so they are more visible-- Night s h i n e   R  01:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Boulder (Ro) - For Approval


I made sure that nobody reserved it.

I took out all white lines.

Black star  05:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

First of all, it's too small, and it looks like you used only paint. Please use pixlr, GIMP, photoshop, etc., The earpink is too neon, and must be lighter, the eye looks weird and the stripes need to be blurred. Sorry if I sound mad. Quailflight 05:57, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I did not use paint. I used www.pixlr.com/editor for it. I will edit that.<font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> A white tom with jet-black paws......... 06:03, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, sorry then. Just do what I said above. Quailflight 06:10, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Edits made: ears lighter, stripes darker, image larger Black  star  05:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Please don't create new sections to say your edits. Type it out below the last message-- Night s h i n e   R  06:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

The image is extremely large now. I just took it out of thumbnail, you shouldn't have the image in thumbnail anyway.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:35, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I shrank it. <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> A white tom with jet-black paws......... 15:48, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Here is the line art again: Layer it over your image for the right size--  Night s h i n e   R  16:27, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I made a new one. The new one is better than the other one. :D <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> A white tom with jet-black paws......... 16:47, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye color so there is a white spot and a black spot so it's not so blue. And connect the stripes a little more. It looks pretty good so far! :) Poppystorm Flight of an Eagle 16:58, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the lineart got erased on the tip of his ear. Draw a black line there to fix it. Oh, and don't forget to color his nose :D Adderstrike Warrior of MythClan 17:05, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

He is supposed to have that! Boulder has a nick in his ear. I will fix his eye.<font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> A white tom with jet-black paws......... 17:13, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Blackstar, I'm tired today and forgot about his ear xD Anyway, it looks really good right now. =) Adderstrike Warrior of MythClan 17:36, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye colour. Look at some tutorials to help with eye colour, shading etc.-- Night s h i n e   R  17:40, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

And also look at Boulder's article to see what the stripes should look like-- Night s h i n e   R  17:44, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I tried my best to make the stripes like they are supposed to look loke. <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 8 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 03:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Now blur the stripes and ear pink, add shading, fix the eye, and thicken the line art on the ear tip-- Night s h i n e   R  03:26, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, Blackstar. Maybe blur the tabby stripes a little more and deepen the nick in his ear. Try changing the ear pink from the shade you have now to #d08383. You should use this shade for his nose, too. Maybe look the eyes a lighter shade of blue, like #1478ff, for example (just an example, keep in mind, this shade may be too bright for Boulder). Other than that, he looks very nice! Holly dapple  04:41, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Blurred stripes, blurred ear, lightened eye colour. <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 8 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 14:42, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

The paint and stripes cover the lineart in lots of places. Fix that.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  14:50, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Took all paint and stripes off the lineart, or at least most. <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 8 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 15:15, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

I've circked the parts where the lineart needs to be fixed in red.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  15:36, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

The circles help. I think I fixed the problem. <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 16:07, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Model the image after this: It might help. $ Coolstar  $  19:12, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

The loner image helps better. :) <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 19:32, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Here's the loner image. $ Coolstar  $  19:33, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

I already used it and tried my best to copy the stripes the way they are supposed to look. It looks good enough, I am not starting over, Its almost done but there is some undetected edits. <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 00:25, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Also, please dont tell me what to edit in words, but show me what to edit. Copy my rouge picture and circle where I need to edit, just like Mousetalon did. <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 00:48, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't see any shading. The image itself is a bit too light, perhaps darken it some? And the stripes are way to jumbled up together. Make them thinner and spread them out some. Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, it's hot pink at the moment Night  Fall 23:08, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I can finally edit! I was blocked somehow after a unregistered user got blocked. I was not on the block log. I am on a computer at school. I cant do chararts at this time. I will start on it when I get out (in less than 2 hours) <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 19:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) For Approval
I couldn't edit the Reservations Table... Could someone do that for me? Thanks. Comments? --<font color="#009900">Mo<font color="#00FF00">onp<font color="#009900">elt  <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">TM&lt;/font&gt; 12:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get it. $ Coolstar  $  12:55, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Amazing! Awesome! I love it! Make the ear pink more visible though. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  13:43, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the markings a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  16:25, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I used the same exact color. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 01:30, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and sharpen the markings-- Night s h i n e   R  01:34, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnpelt Alt Apprentice - For Approval
Can someone redo the highlights for me? It's not fixing. Also, I'm probably not going to work on this until Saturday...unless I'm lucky any old time. -- Quailflight 11:07, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Hurrah for pixlr's color replacement tool! -- Quailflight 11:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some. The ones on her haunch and shoulder look white. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:42, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

That's the problem. I need some help with them. So I would like someone to correct them for me. Quailflight 23:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I was able to fix the bottom highlight, but could someone give me help with the top? -- Quailflight 10:45, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) ~*~ Up for approval
Withdrawed Reedwhisker (Ki) and put up this! Sooo any comments? Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 13:30, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Just blur the shading some more-- Night s h i n e   R  05:27, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Blur the ear pink. ~ Blue Lightning Strikes! I'm so shocked  20:37, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Blurred the ear pink some more. Blurred the shading too, I personaly thought it looked better before...maybe thats because I blurred it, im the worst at bluring shading >:) Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 00:03, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

looks amazing, dawn. just blur the chest shading some. after that, I think it will be ready. Also darken the shading on the tail. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 18:04, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: fixed it. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 22:31, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it along the back a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  06:31, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Pikepaw (A) - For Approval
This is my first Charart. Tigerheart102 18:55, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

It's good for your first try :) But I see no shading. Look at these tutorials to learn how to do a charart. Night  Fall 18:59, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Also, the nose needs to be black and the ear pink needs to be smaller.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  17:39, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Needs shading, and or highlights. The ear pink needs to be smaller and a more natural colour, also the nose needs to be black like Mousetalon pointed out. This is excellent for your first try!! :) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 01:28, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ears too neon and so is the nose. And I don't see any highlights or shading. :] FrostHeart 01:13, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional so if you dont want to you don't have to add them. Lighten the eye color a bit. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:03, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - For approval
for my second charart it turned out horribly (if it is not mine but someone elses because Mine fails but it looks like mine) Birdwing 19:54, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Oms i forgot ear pink Birdwing 19:57, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

You also need to color the nose. Asides from that this image isn't horrible. It's actually quite good. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:54, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ok added nose pink and ear pink Birdwing 20:59, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else i need to fix? Birdwing 22:20, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

The color of the earpink is too bright. Choose a softer shade of pink and blur it. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  23:25, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded chose softer shade and blurred it Birdwing 23:31, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Use a different pink. Something made from red instead of a magenta color. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 23:39, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Used more red color and blurred it Birdwing 23:45, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks odd. Use the pink next to the white from this. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 00:47, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded used the closest pink Birdwing 00:56, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, Birdwing. All I see is that the earpink on both ears should be blurred. Also, Blur the shading on her right. (our left)-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:09, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is too bright. Make it darker, like copy the color from another white cat. Quailflight 19:11, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded put more like the ear pink for white cats and blurred the ears and shading (Note: i use pixlr that is proboly why the blurring looks messed up my gimp wont work Birdwing 19:33, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more, and make it a wee bit smaller. Quailflight 19:34, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded and made the ear pink more smaller Birdwing 19:55, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Better then mine. =) Blur the shading on our right leg.(========> -that way.) ~ Blue Lightning Strikes!  I'm so shocked  20:40, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred shading

Blur the earpink a bit more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:22, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thats as far it will blur pixlr blurring tool is bad but i will try tomorrow Birdstar 01:48, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit more. The ear pink looks a little too purple. Make it pinker-- Night s h i n e   R  06:30, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded made the ear pink more pink and blurred the chest shading Birdstar 13:42, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else need fixing? Birdstar 17:21, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Doesn't look like it. Comments before approval? <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 20:56, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (D) - For Approval
Comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  00:49, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

First Comment! That looks great! :) <font color="#33ccff">Blackstar <font color="#33ccff" style="background:orange;"> 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 01:00, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is gorgeous Night! Darken the stripes on the face Night  Fall 03:23, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened face stripes-- Night s h i n e   R  05:29, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Again, Night, you astound me. Make the ear pink more visible, if you can.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  17:35, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ah-maz-ing! The only thing I can say is to blur the bottom stripe on his face some more. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 00:25, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred face stripe, made ear pink a bit lighter-- Night s h i n e   R  00:45, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

amazing night, all I see is that the tail stripes along the tip of the tail could be defined. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 18:01, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded defined stripes on tail tip-- Night s h i n e   R  01:05, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - You should either add some highlights or darken your shading on the tail - it looks rather flat. Other than that, nice job! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:32, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened tail shading-- Night s h i n e   R  03:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me :) Good job! Comments Before Approval? Night  Fall 06:43, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (R)- For Approval
 Dark hallows 05:48, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pink-ish and colour in the nose. Darken the highlights a bit and darken/add the tail shading.-- Night s h i n e   R  05:52, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Done.-- Dark hallows 16:35, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  17:39, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred it all I could.  Dark hallows 23:29, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe, make the nose colour more red-brown coloured.-- Night s h i n e   R  00:35, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Like this? Dark hallows 00:51, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yep! Brighten the shoulder highlight a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  01:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color than pink, and the lineart looks odd in some places. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 01:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) - For Approval
There are two discussions, so this should technically be under the limit. Anywho, this is the most evil cat ever as little apprenticeXD. Constructments? -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 19:36, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading (or brighten the highlights). Dark hallows 23:33, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten his chest highlight. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 00:07, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Brightened highlights. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 00:42, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a little reddish. Lighten the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  06:29, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Desaturated stripes and lightened ear pink. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 17:13, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Songbird - For Approval
yay guess what ice isn't leaving. :D Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:15, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! You're staying! You need to add tabby stripes and possibly a highlight to her belly area, other than that it's really good. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:20, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:29, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely :) Add a highlight to the face, and blur the highlight on her belly Night  Fall 23:04, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the hanch highlight, otherwise this is stunning :3 Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 00:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, everyone! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 00:22, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on the belly (sort of between the front and back legs) needs more blurring. I really love her color ^^. Blur the back shading some more.-- Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 07:32, June 5, 2010 (UTC)--

Reuploaded. Thanks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 01:12, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The colour looks a little too pale. Darken the shading and blur all the highlights more. Make the nose colour darker-- Night s h i n e   R  01:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 01:26, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, nose colour, ear pink and highlights. Fill in the white pixel on the arm facing us.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:27, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made the shading really dark.... <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 12:08, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading and stripes. → •Maple  fern•  ←  22:30, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading. Darken face, right arm, and belly shading. Lighten the ear pink a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  06:41, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
Oatpaw yay! Comments? (This is 35- there is one discussion) Kaoru   Hitachiin  01:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice! Maybe blur the earpink more, and blur the shading (especially the shading under the muzzle) and highlights. Other than that, he looks nice! Holly dapple  01:58, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Kaoru   Hitachiin  23:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, you got the shading/highlights thing, but the ear pink is hardly visible now. Holly dapple  01:44, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Kaoru  Hitachiin'''  01:52, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (W) - For Approval
I like how he turned out! :3 What about you?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:27, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just blur the top of his head some more (the shading) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 22:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: What else?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:44, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, it looks a little lighter than his rogue image that is up for approval. Move the ear pink up some more and blur it-- Night s h i n e   R  23:00, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 01:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 12:59, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart(W) For Approval
This is like...Horrible. Comments?<font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 01:59, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is great!! Just thicken the shading a lot so it is like his medicine cat image. Blur the stripes more-- Night s h i n e   R  02:03, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Buzzardstar - For Approval


I just love doing leaders! This makes my third one I believe :) Well here's Buzzardstar from Battle of The Clans but I think something is missing...comments?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 04:28, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin.-- Night s h i n e   R  05:32, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

His ear pink looks a little too neonish, and the shading could be darkened more (like under the tail and in between legs) 雨  晶須  21:19, June 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Finally able to upload after that long scheduled maintaince. I'm not messing with the ear pink because its the exact color from his deputy image. See below and I was playing with the shading out of boredem before this comment so let me know.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:58, June 4, 2010 (UTC)



Brokenstar (Ki) - For Approval


Yeah, well, can't say much about this one. Pretty bad, eh? SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 06:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks odd. Try making it bend toward him. Make the stripes more v shaped like his leader image.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:25, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He looks black on my screen. Maybe lighten him a bit? Skydragon Listen...the wind is singing... 14:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow I haven't been on in soooo long... Anyway, he's a tad too dark, like Skydragon said, and I think there are a few gray pixels near the top of his tail (in background). 雨 晶須  21:15, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the top of his tail a bit. It looks mor squished than broken to me. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:45, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Petalfall - For Approval


For spoiler purposes I won't say who she is. I tried out Nightshine's tutorial on this; it worked pretty well. Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 15:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * She's pretty =) I'd say a touch too pink though. My computer is on the edge of it being too pink and it has fairly good colour. /ramble. -- Sandy star 16:00, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sand. XD I desaturated her a touch to give her a more natural gray-pink color. Does this look better? <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 16:18, June 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Much =) -- Sandy star 16:20, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Amazing Bramble, all I see is the shading beneath the jaw should be darkened a touch. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:02, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * Her ear pink looks a little too dark and somewhat reddish, perhaps choose a lighter color for it? Otherwise, she's great! (BTW Sandy, what does /ramble mean?) 雨  晶須  21:17, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the fur a bit more orangish so it looks a bit more like cream. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 21:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwhisker(E)-For Approval
Patchy? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:34, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Some of his patches are pink...and blur the shading more. But good job! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:36, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the patches are pink because i assumed patchy fur ment that some was missing. What do you think? I'll get to the shading after the patchy thing is sorted out. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:43, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The pink look like patches, perhaps put black lines around the skin part? It is too dark on the left (near his rear), but he's great otherwise! 雨 晶須  22:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D)- For Approval
Yay! Second charart! =) What should I do to improve it? <font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear pink should be darker, shading needs to be blurred more, and her tail needs more shading. 雨 晶須  23:12, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Close the gaps in the shading and blur it more. Also add shading to the legs and tail. FrostCloud 23:14, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks yellow as opposed to ginger. Try saturating her some Night  Fall 23:19, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, as stated above, and the ear pink needs to be moved more into the ear and lightened. Also, remember to put "For Approval" in the discussion title.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  14:14, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderfoot (W)- For Approval
Whoo-hoo, I'm on a roll! I got Reedwhisker approved, started fixing my tutorials, re-did my warrior one, and made this one! =) Okay, so here is a warrior I found rather annoying, but cool to make. Comments?  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  23:35, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderpelt123
A user, Cinderpelt123, is putting unapproved pictures on articles. Me and Shimmerpool have asked her to stop, but she doesn't. She ignores us and goes and does whatever she'd like to do. Can this user be stopped? Quailflight 13:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)