Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded Ikilledit 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't really match. Also lighten it so you can see the lineart, and add/majorly define the shading. 05:38, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink on the right. (Our right) 01:33 Sun Jul 15

Still working on this? o3o 02:53, 16, 07, 2012

Yes, re-uploaded. o3o 09:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't match. Take the eye and earpink color from her other images, add more mottles, and make them smaller. 00:44, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a leedle bit. 02:34, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks brown with black mottles...make her more black. Skt Omnia vincit amor  02:36, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this?

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Declined
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading a bit more. Unless changes aren't showing. 01:21, 12, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 20:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case the changes aren't showing here he is. 20:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

These stripes don't match the other images in the slightest. I know it's a kit blank and it's harder, but not even the stripe style matches. Would you consider redoing them? 20:59, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the base coat should be much lighter. Breeze whisker  04:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the fur, but I didn't redo the stripes because I think they are pretty similar if another person disagrees then I will try to redo them, but I don't have GIMP and I can't find the xcf file so I would have to redo the entire thing. Sorry, I really don't want to sound rude or anything. 21:23, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, look at this image. It's nowhere close to matching the others. If you don't redo this, someone else will. 02:25, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gotta agree Wild. They really don't look like the others. Breeze whisker  00:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving you my permission to redo this if need be. It needs to match. 04:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I probably need to thicken the stripes. And fix the earpink. 23:01, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes, smudge them a lot more, darken and define the shading. 00:33, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Change the pattern to match the warrior... 00:48, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the shading have a slight reddish/pinkish tint so it looks like the other images? 11:57, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Declining due to the one week limit for tweaks. If anyone has an extra spot, they may take over.

Mistystar (Q) - Redone
Shading made no sense. Last OA was Shelly. Took the shading from Willowpelt and the colors from her apprentice. Comments? 00:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it/define it on her tail just a tad bit? 02:47, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same as the shading on Willowpelt, so I'd rather not.... but how do you blur and define shading? 0.o 06:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it then make it darker. 17:19, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I defined/darkened the shading on him. OA= Bramble, than redone by Rowan. Changes aren't showing yet. >.> Comments? 19:29 Sun Jul 15

Changes are now showing! :) 22:39 Sun Jul 15

Can you make the earpink color match the other image and make it more triangular? 02:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadedo.o The earpink is straight from the other image, but I made it more triangular ;). I can't fix the one on (our) left because it'll erase the pelt colour. 03:10 Mon Jul 16

I still can't see the shading very well. To me, he seems darker on his kit image than his apprentice. Not sure if that's just me being a derp though  04:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, do you want me to try and fix it or are you as onfused as I am now? :P 14:54 Mon Jul 16

Maybe you want to lighten his base coat a couple shades? 15:43, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do that when I get home. :) At the library! Woo! High-speed here :P  15:52 Mon Jul 16

Still working on this?

Yea,did I not say I would be away from Teusday 'till today? 23:41 Fri Jul 20

Re-uploaded 00:22 Sat Jul 21

Blossomkit (Ki) - Declined
Ew, blotchy shading. Anyways, I just added a layer of shading over it. OA was Sandy, with a tweak by Ice and Leaf-storm. Comments? 19:58, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading right over her left leg. Looks good! Breeze whisker  23:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading over left leg. And thanks. :) 03:07, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her head and chest. 17:18, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Declined on request. Icy said she'll repost over the weekend.

Poppydawn (E) ~ Tweaked
Oh god I hate this image x.x I redid the stripes so she could match her other images better, comments? >.< 17:09, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, or lighten the shading in that area. 21:16, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened it a tad, but I rather not change it too much because it matches the other images. 14:03, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is probably just me... but lighten the stripes to match. Also just a preference but you could tint the shading to match a bit more. owo 08:02, 19, 07, 2012

Mothwing (Mca) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to be defined and OA was Shelly. ^^ Comments? 14:20, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripe, that's near her ear closest to us? The other stripes around it are more blurred. 14:58, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:21, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe dull the "highlights" a tiiny bit? owo 08:07, 19, 07, 2012

Might just be me...but could you blur the haunch shading? 13:09, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I was away for a few days. I think that the 'highlights' are okay, but if someone else agrees, I'll tone them down. o3o Oh, and I can't blur the haunch shading anymore, but I can blur the markings there. (they kind of look like they're part of the shading, but their not >.<)  14:38, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (W) - Redone
Issues with the pattern. OA was Leafstrike with a tweak by Ivy. 17:03, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste. And define the mottles a little more? c: 04:46 Thu Jul 19

Re-uploaded. You'll know changes are showing when there's no line off his back... x.x 16:54, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

This is really pretty. Could you maybe add a bit more shading on his rear end? Breeze whisker  17:54, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks 8D I really hope you meant his hock, because that's where I put it... 18:41, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you defne the shading a little more? 15:46, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think it's fine... And the shading's dark enough as it is. 15:49, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

It's about as dark as it was on Mothwing's images before they were nominated to be tweaked. 16:06, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 16:42, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Graymist (Q) ~ Redone
Fuuuuuuuu-- why'd you make the one pattern that Photoshop hates, Leggo? :c Anyways, redone for unnatural stripes. Most recent OA was Specklestream. Comments? 00:57, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Pretty! :3 03:45, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. c: Thanks Misty. 13:09, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more shading on her tummy and on her neck. Looks good. ^^ Breeze  whisker  17:49, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just redid the shading overall, it bugged me so much. 13:28, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and tail. 17:03, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Heatherstar (L) ~ Tweaked
This is actually tweaked 8D I redid the shading. OA was the most amazing guild master &lt;3. Comments? 18:38 Thu Jul 19

Blur the earpink/or smudge pelt into it (left ear) Nice job on the shading 20:19, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. It's just Mounty's light source.

Can you define the earpink a bit though on the ear to our right? 19:42, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:10 Fri Jul 20

Now the other ear I think should be smudged...xD Skt Omnia vincit amor  01:46, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:22 Sat Jul 21

Voletooth (E) ~ Redone
The stripes were unnatural. OAs were Nightfall and Yurt. Comments? 20:28 Fri Jul 20

Can you blur the chest texture and make the earpink a tad smaller? Beautiful 8D. 22:21, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D I didn't blur the chest texture though. 22:56 Fri Jul 20

I say smudge it just a tad. It looks a little odd. 00:56, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:32 Sat Jul 21

This is gorgeous. 8D Could you define the shading a little on the tail, and blur it on the chest? Breeze whisker  04:57, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much 8DD 06:03 Sat Jul 21

Thistleclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
I honestly have //no// idea who the OA is, it's been redone, re-uploaded, and tweaked so many times. o.o Anyways, I defined the shading. 8D

Blur <--- that side of the haunch. 22:23, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. But, I'll do it if others ask.

Minnowtail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Ivypool, with a tweak by DJ. I blurred the shading and defined it.

Hattie (KP) - Redone
Uh, yeah. OA was Icethroat with a redo by Mistystar. 00:56, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Add/define the shading on her front and back legs? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  01:45, July 21, 2012 (UTC)