Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 69

Brokenstar (Alt. Elder) - Approved
Brokenstar was mentioned as black in BotC and at that point in time he was an elder, so I figured it would be fine to make this. I need some help with the broken tail. I was just gonna copy it from his elder image, but that turned out to be harder than I thought it would be.... Anyways, comments? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:50, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I managed to copy the broken tail. XD ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:07, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh. Me likey! Maybe redden the earpink a bit and blur it. Perhaps darken the image, as right now it looks more dark gray than black. And change the shading on the tail; if your light source is from the front (which it appears to be) then the shading should be the opposite of what it is right now. And maybe smudge the eye lineart a tad just so it looks more like he's blind. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 08:12, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I darkened the image, fixed the tail shading, and made it look like he's blind. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:26, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Blur the highlights. 19:35, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred them as much as they can be blurred now. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:49, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the haunch a tad, add/darken the shading under the forelegs, brighten the ear-pink a tad and center it. Scarlet wind Step into the Light 00:49, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm not sure that helped much, but I did my best. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:56, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit.

Reuploaded - Personally, I kinda think this is getting TOO red, but that's just me... XD ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:50, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and darken the tail shading. Night shine  05:24, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Centered the earpink best I could and darkened the tail shading. I also desaturated the scar on his eyes cause it was really buggin me. XD ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:45, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? Sorry I'm a bit impatient. XD ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:19, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading a bit. Night shine  03:50, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit. 22:16, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the tail shading and darkened the neck shading. Edit - The changes aren't showing for some reason. They might later though. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:03, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

I see the changes. Darken the tail shading a bit? wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 06:44, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the tail shading. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:59, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The earpink could be reddened a bit. 22:19, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading by the base of the tail, by the belly, and on his right forelegs. Scarlet wind Step into the Light 20:58, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

The eye looks blurred to me, but that could just be me. Otherwise it looks pretty darn good :) 00:08, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I lightened the shading said places and reddened the earpink. That's as red as I'm going, if I do it more it'll look like his ear's bleeding. XD And yes, his eye's blurred. I was told to do that. He was blind when he was an elder and it helps make him look like he was. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:58, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Night shine  00:37, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be picky, but there looks like there's a patch of a shading by the base of the tail that's darker than the rest. Can you blur it out a bit more? Scarlet wind Step into the Light 22:47, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I did my best to fix the shading there, but it's blurred as much as it can be and it seems to be the same tone according to gimp, so.... *shrugs* ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:33, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste outside the front paw. I like this =D  wildheart     spr ing rai n ♫ 01:01, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :) And there's nothing outside the front paw.... 0.o I make sure of that before I reupload, and I don't see any... ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:19, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's a faint outline on the front paw that's closest to us. Maybe try re-uploading the pic again. Perhaps the changes aren't showing...? wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 03:01, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I didn't see anything before and I still don't see anything, but I reuploaded it.... ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 03:40, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Night shine  05:53, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think the scars should be more spread apart; they almost look like one big pink face stripe. 23:48, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

The 24 hours were over when Nightflower commented. This should be approved. wildheart    spr ing rai n ♫ 05:50, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

So is this approved or do I have to do what Nightflower said...? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:32, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with the scar, and it was been 24 hours, I think it should be approved and go on his page. It's not for me to decide though xD [Ivystripe not signed in] 209.34.114.210 14:21, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to go ahead and approve this. -- Night  shine  05:48, May 4, 2011 (UTC)