Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 59

Darkstar (SC) (L) ~ Withdrawn
Tweaked to be somewhat darker and to have black on him. Comments for improvement? Bbun (talk) 22:27, February 19, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

My brown and white rabbit has fluffy grey undercoat, but you can't see it unless you part the fur with your fingers... hmm, not sure if this is nessary.. but you could give it a darker look. Right now he looks like he is brown with black patches... ☮♞  ✞SorrelΩflower☠ ☯⛄ I needCoffee!

It's visible to the normal eye. If Cloudstar can see it, that means it should be on his charart. I've already brought that up before. Could you make it more..fuzzy, perhaps? It seems like blotches of fur, when I think they should be streaks or something of that nature.

Yup, it shouldn't be plain patches if it's his undercoat. Maybe slightly resembling a brindle tortie in how the colors streak through the pelt. 00:09, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Also, it seems like there's no shading on the black at all. 00:09, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 00:19, February 20, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

They're still like patches. 00:20, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe Darkstar's color would be like an agouti pattern, sort of like Sorrel's rabbit? I researched a little; Agouti's have bands of color in the hair shaft, I suppose you could say under laid with black. Here's an image of the cat itself:  So, sort of like doing a ticked tabby but more blurring? I'm just thinking, sorry... 00:27, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, that would work! Actually, even though I own a tabby, his fur is brown (though he is light brown) and when looked at closely, his fur has black bands on it and it gives him a slightly speckly look, just increase it on him! 02:31, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that the underlaid with black means he has a two-layered coat and the undercoat is black. My cat has an undercoat that's creamy. It happens. You know, like how birds have downy feathers under their top feathers. So the black, largely, would not show unless his coat was beant backwards. 22:40, February 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bbun (talk) 23:05, February 20, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading.

Re-ups. Bbun (talk) 02:02, February 21, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

It doesn't really look like it's his undercoat now. And the spots looks kinda paintbrushy. Make them more streaky or fleck-like like a ticked tabby or brindled tortie or both and smudge them a bit. 06:54, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

He's basically a flecked tabby, ya know, with multi-coloration on each strand of fur. I think you can do it like a fur texture in brown on tip of a black base. 18:09, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawn, because that undercoat x.x. If someone else wants to work on this, go ahead, and I'll send them the xcf if they would like. Bbun (talk) 21:47, February 22, 2013 (UTC)Bbun

I'll take over this.