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Brackenfur (W) ~ Withdrawn
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar. 05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D 19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should be shorter; it doesn't go all the way to his underarm. It's just on his flank. 20:50, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? 00:41, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Possibly thicken the stripes a bit? 01:14 Sat Feb 4

Make the earpink a bit bigger too. 01:18 Sat Feb 4

Make the scar a bit thicker. 03:55, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, i think the ear-pink is fine and for the stripes, they are the same thickness as the other ones. Other then that, comments? 18:27, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please make the earpink a bit bigger and define it? Also move it into the ear more. 19:13 Sun Feb 5

Blur the shading too. 23:34 Sun Feb 5

The stripes may be the same thickness as his kit charart, but this isn't a kit. As he grew, his stripes naturally grew as well to be proportional to his body size. On that note, the apprentice charart should be tweaked as well. 04:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading looks... odd, i'm trying to fix that, don't worry. 21:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That's because it's dark. Lighten it, pleeease. :P 21:20, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stupid shading Why must it be so irritating? Comments? 21:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading a little more. And where is the light source? I can't find one. 22:46, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 00:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten or blur the shading, and define the earpink. Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes and change the color of the scar to something a bit more different from the stripes, I almost told you to get rid of the extra ginger stripe on the flank. XD 15:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes some more. 22:50, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

... Okay, I'm sorry, but this just doesn't feel like Brackenfur. Can we do an overhaul on the image and make it a redo?-- 23:55, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rain, are you still working on this? 20:09, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Well, not right now, sorry. I just don't have the time. I am going to Withdraw this for now and work on it later. 19:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Shelly, do you mean like, redo all of his images to look more like him, or just redo this to look like his kit? -- Elork   13:50, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Highlights needed to be blurred, but I re-did the shading. OA was Mousetalon with a redo by Oblivion and tweaks by Paleh, Scarlet and Icestorm. 21:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Waste inbetween the legs, m'dear, Fire. 21:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

XD That always happens. Re-Uploaded. 21:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:55 Sat Feb 11

Re-Uploaded. 15:03, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

She's getting a bit gray from the shading. Could you saturate her more? 16:24, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:05, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Her eyes look red? Maybe change it to a more orangy colour? Sky To Kill An Empire  02:47, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

XD I forgot about this. Re-Uploaded. 22:54, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail shading. Sky To Kill An Empire  00:54, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Q) - Tweaked
I tweaked the color shade to make it darker. Original Artist is Mumble I think, with a minor tweak by Ivy and a tweak/redo by Paleh. What do you think? 23:12, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Purdy <3 Lighten the shading a tad. 23:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great and all, but why'd it need to be darkened? She looked dark gray before, and she's not meant to be black.... 04:30, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Because the rogue and loner images didn't match. I added it to the tweak list. Check 'em out yourself. 04:37, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

EDIT: if anything, now it's too dark. Try taking the dodge tool over it once at about...20 %. 04:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Mmm... Not sure about this one. 05:43, Mon, Feb, 13, 2012

I'm only gonna comment and say that the color matches now. Much better, DJ. 05:51, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail and haunch shading. Sky To Kill An Empire  11:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the stomach. -- Elork   13:58, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to disagree Cloudy, but looking at them side by side, this is actually a bit light. Could you darken it, and darken the shading too? 10:32, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Ah, tweaking. =D Anyway, it was on the list for shading, so, I just layered some shading overtop of the image, not major or anything. Okay, I think the OA was Snowfeather1 with some help along the way from Night shine. Comments? 02:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and blur them 03:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and chest. Elork  01:48, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid the shading. x.x 02:32, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge, blur, and lighten the earpink. 20:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 23:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

And thicken it. 15:59, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC)- Tweaked


I think I died while making him....I swear I did....Anyway, had blurred lineart shading was blotchy, needing a crusty/runny nose, and patchy fur, OC was Dawnfeather, With a Tweak from Ivyheart. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a missing patch of fur on his shoulder? And blur the earpink a little. 16:31, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, I tried to copy the patchy fur from his elder... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 00:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

But, the linearts are facing opposite directions, Maple. Give it a shot and see what it looks like. 05:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (A) - Redone
Got permission from Mounty to redo her to match her warrior. OA was Goldenpaw and then redone by Mounty with the new lineart. Comments? 02:18, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the "highlight" on the flank. Lovely as always, Scarlet. 06:50, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by/on the tail. 21:45, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the haunch and tail lighter parts. Sky To Kill An Empire  03:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Foxleap (Alt. W) - Redone
Finally I can redo him. Ugh, he was probably my least favorite of all my tabbies I've done. Anyways, he needed to be redone cause he was a triangle tabby, needed to be longhaired, and was more light brown than tawny. I got the color from Birchfall's tawny alt, so don't say anything about the color not being right. Not sure who the OA was..... ;D *pokes self* Comments? 10:55, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the shading on the tail. C:  Elork   13:50, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (D) - Redone
I'm getting sick of his images.... x.x He needed to match his other images. OA was Insane with a tweak by Moonflight. Everything but the tail is from the warrior, so don't comment on that. 10:55, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Waste between the legs :P Other than that........ Wonderful job, Paleh! <3 00:47 Tue Feb 14

Clovertail (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked
That was too difficult to have been a tweak, but I'll call it that anyway. @.@ This alt happened when she was not pregnant or nursing, just staying in the nursery as a perma-queen. (ffff, hate perma-queens) Anyway, transferred Squirrelflight's lineart to this, minus the messed up ear and bushy tail. Comments? 15:11, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

It seems like the tip of her front paw farthest from us is cut off. And my comments on Squirrel's image apply here. 15:22, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Please see my counter-comments on Squirrel's image for why I'm not doing the second half of your request. 15:34, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:37, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink less orange? 22:28, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) - Redone
Okay, this was on the redo list for the shading, blotchy highlights, and the patches could be more realistic. OA was Mousetalon. Comments? 23:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

<3 this Twi! Just lighten up the white a little. 23:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the patches a little less wildly smeared? It looks a bit strange for a short furred cat. 23:42, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudberry (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Bluestar1776, shading needed to be tweaked. Comments? 00:51, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge and define the earpink, abd blur the shadin some more. 8F Sky To Kill An Empire  01:01, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Mudclaw (D) - Redone
Okay, okay, before anyone blows up, I honestly couldn't make this: into something that even resembled this. OA was Insaneuler. Comments? 04:16, February 14, 2012 (UTC)


 * Blows up* Lighten up the shading and brighten the lighter parts a bit. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  11:25, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly add some more mottles. 01:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tanglewhisker (E) - Tweaked
I forgot to put this up! Original artist was Hawkfire, with BlueOrca taking over. Comments? 18:08, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

What needed to be tweaked? 18:11, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it doesn't look much different from the original. In fact, I see no discernible difference. 20:02, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot to say that he needed a ragged ear. Haven't you noticed the far ear...? 20:39, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ah, I didn't see that. Sorry 8D 20:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't even see that. Whoops. Sorry 'bout that, Moon. Anyways, I dunno if it's just me, but the color on the ear seems a different shade then the rest of the body. 20:44, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I think those are highlights. Should I fix it? 21:07, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, if you don't mind. 21:08, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded So small. 18:08, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Owlstar (A) ~ Tweaked
Lol zomg cat. Anyway I'm not sure who the OA was but it was redone with the new blanks by me. His eyes needed to be bigger. Comments? 05:48, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and tail. He looks frightened by something xD. Elork  13:46, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded He must have went on butt.com XD 14:16, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you widen the pupils a bit, so it looks big, not just tall? :P 15:57, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Owlstar (W) ~ Tweaked
The eye needed to be bigger. OA was cloudy I think, I'm not sure *too lazy to go digging* Comments? 05:57, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the pupil a little bigger? 06:10, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:20, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the inner ear match the leader please. 06:25, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

No offence Shelly, but I don't think the inner ear on the leader looks very natural. I'd rather they stayed like this personally. 12:07, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

It is natural, actually. Dark cats tend to have dark skin. 14:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Not necessarily all of the time. 14:28, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but that's how I made the leader image, and this is being tweaked to resemble that is it not? 14:31, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Not necessarily. More to match his description. And the picture you linked it looked more like it just had a lot of black fur in the ear so it was hard to see the skin. I still think it'll look more natural like this. 15:55, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

My black and grey cats have sorta greyish pinky skin, so maybe make it more greyer? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  22:38, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (Q) - Redone
Before you spazz, I got permission from multiple people do redo her. OA was probably Echomist, but I don't think so. It might've just been a file change. 21:58, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the patches a tad, Loonie. I adore this. <3 22:02, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink a tad. *Slowly reaches arm out and steals* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 22:08, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink some? *dies from awesomeness*  22:11, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle (E) ~ Redone
He was a triangular tabby. I wanted to try a classic tabby so until I get this one approved, I won'tt upload his rogue. OA was Night shine. Comments? 22:05, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look blocky, he needs some stripes at the base of his tai;, on his arms, and on his face, and the color looks off *grumbles* This was gonna be my little secret lol 22:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for stealing :P It's kinda hard to get the right color because the shading/highlights are super thick. 22:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt. L) - Tweaked
OA was Mintstarr, finished by Dapplecloud33. Since he is golden and therefore ginger, he needed stripes. That is the only thing I have done to this image. 23:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)