Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Thornclaw (W) ~ Redone
Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?

Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now lighten it and add more shading all around. 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch -- 01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Sorry this took so long, I lost his shading layer, so i had to re-make his shading layer, and then, i rushed it, and got this....^^; Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and blur the highlights. 14:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Wow....that was fast ;D Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred more. 15:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-it has now been blurred to a max. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, it still needs to be blurred and blended a little more. 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried, had like 1% affect every here and there, but not much.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:26, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, I have some advice for you that helped me before I learned the other-worldly powers of the guassian blur tool. If you smudge the shading a lot with the second-to smallest or third-to smallest brush, then blur it on 100%, that actually helps to make the shading have a natural gradient. 00:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

.....What? I'm sorry, i'm diselxic..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 12:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

What don't you understand? You use layers, yes? 21:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

He still seems kind of shiny. Maybe dull the highlights a tad? Sky- Killer of Daleks and Cybermen 22:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy....I don't understand any of it, and No, i don't..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The shading. It needs to be blurred. 22:57, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

sighs* Alright, let me try to rephrase it (it's going to be more difficult since you don't have layers) The smudge tool (which is a hand with the pointer finger sticking out) is what you need. Use it like you would normally do to something to smear it, make it go back and forth. Then, take your blur tool. There should be a setting somewhere that has a bar and some numbers, it should say "Rate", slide it to the right until it says 100%. It should really help smooth your shading out a lot. This should be much more informative, yes? 03:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, i got it that time :) I'm sorry....I can understtand things that well, and then i get sonfuesed, and then i get mad, and then i kill a pillow.....DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the shoulder, move it up a bit, darken the highlight on the haunch, and blur all the shading and highlights. 03:51 Thu Oct 6

Okay, give me some time, my laptop is being spazzy, so, let me get it squared away, or let me buy a new one, give me like two or three days, 'kay? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, my laptop is fixed now, give me sometime, all right? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

No. Maplepool, I'm sorry, but we can't wait forever. Either fix this or withdraw this. 14:00, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it, i was talking about giving me time  to fix Thornclaw :P should have been more clear on that, sorry ^^;  Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:42, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's what I was talking about. The shading still needs to be blurred. 16:19, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eye. 01:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, this hasn't been re-uploaded since the third. Please reupload soon or it will be declined. 03:27, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

If the leads wish it and Maple gives me permission, may I take over this once Brackenfur is completed? 15:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, go ahead, if the other leads agree. Maplepool, please don't kill me with a blow torch, but this is taking you a VERY long time to do, and many other images are getting approved while yours isn't completed. Letting Icestorm do it will get it done much faster. Maybe you could try doing something easier for now? 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

No problem here. Since Brackenfur was archived, you can take this one over. Sorry, Maple, but you can't spend forever and a day on an image. =/ 14:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Comments? 22:14, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make him a tad bit more golden? 22:20, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded': 23:31, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I understand it's your style to make the shading dark, but that doesn't mean it should always stay dark on every image. Is there any chance of you lightening it on this one? Or does what you said on some of your other images about not lightening the shading still apply? Personally, I think you should lighten it, I like dark shading too, but it's almost black in the darkest part. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:58, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I'd rather appreciate it if I wasn't told to lighten the shading, because dark shading is my style and I imagine cats with dark shading. Sure, I'll lower the opacity, but still. I lightened the shading on this one. 21:00, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. 21:01, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Now blur the shading. 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Chest shading needs to be blurred and lightened. 11:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

^ Looks like someone forgot to sign! 00:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:44, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; other than that, I think its awesome! =3 21:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source. 23:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:12, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Re-uploaded. 11:23, October 12, 2011 (UTC)'''

Darken the shading a bit. 14:32, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 11:02, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (W) - Redone
I redid the stripes, but kept the pattern the same. It wasn't clear as to why the stripes needed to be change, but here's what I got. Comments? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white and brown meet, and darken the shading. 21:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. And dull it a little bit. Nice job. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better. Make the ear pink smaller, please. 21:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I was getting tired of the old image. xD Nice job, smudge the white into the pelt minorly. 00:03, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and perhaps add a few more. It looks a little too spaced-out. 00:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:21, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earr pink smaller and redder. 21:27, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

And more triangular. 00:41, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- text? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:34, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's still problems with the ear pink. Center it, make it triangular, and redder. 14:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- better? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:21, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the stripes on her tail and haunch. Center the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is way to bright and make it a little but darker and blur it. Make the stripes darker and maybe thicker. This is good! 01:43, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink and define the stripes on the face. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:44, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink, enlarge it, and blur it a lot. 00:04 Wed Oct 12

Is it just me, or is the front leg's shading really dark? Senbonzakura ''' Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink is way too red, and needs to be blurred, so make the earpink more pinkish gray. 14:34, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mint left the project, so someone can take over or it'll be declined. (Geez, I feel like a lead! x3) -- 22:25, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Since Mint left, I'll take over. :3 00:10, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, you can redo it again, or continue off of this one. 20:29, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderheart (W) - Redone
So it said Cinderheart needed to be done for multiple reasons, mainly to get rid of the Y stripes and add dapples. Sorry about the fail dapples. XD Do I need to darken the stripes? OA was either Sand or Bramble I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:26, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, if you say you fail or suck ever again, some stuff is going to go down. Define the shading on the legs and haunch a little more ;3 The stripes look good, better light then dark actually. 23:28, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a ibt? Also, make the eyes more blue, they look a bit too gray. 23:32, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *slowly backs away from Splashy* But what if it's true.....? *hides* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:37, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if it's supposed to be like this or you want it to, but she looks blue-ish. 00:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my god. Paleclaw. -dies- THIS IS AMAZING. 00:15, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her eye color, it looks to pale. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:18, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yes, it was tinter blue. I usually do that with my chararts by coloring the shading, but I desaturated it a bit more now. And I darkened the eye color. Thank you Icy! *bows* So, no more apprentices, even tweaks, right? Cause I wanna do all her images, but that'd only be the kit if we're not tweaking the apprentices anymore. I personally think maybe we should tweak the ones that look completely different from the main image, since they're gonna sit like that till OOTS is done if not, and that's kind of a long time.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Omg.....this is gorgeous Paleh! You never fail to make a charart look awesome. Anyways, darken the shading a teensy bit and blur the earpink a bit more. This is epic! :3 10:44, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and there are no apprentice tweaks. ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:42, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, still working on this? 14:30, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I am, I'm working on it now. I'm SOOOO sorry, I've been really busy, then the little time I've had on the computer I've procrastinated. X.X I need to work on not doing that.... but anyways, I'll upload today, probably within the next few minutes if I can. Sorry again! I'm not usually one to let my images sit this long. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:43, October 13, 2011 (UTC)'

Reuploaded' ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:49, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Whitetail (Q) ~ Redone
Needed to get rid of the prickly shading, it was on the re-do list. Comments? 00:02, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the OA? :3 Looks great! Blur the haunch and tail shading, and blur the earpink. 00:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I forgot that. OA is Darkhallows. 00:05, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 00:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does she have the FAINTEST stripe of waste on her back? lol, i just read her page, how do you get a PALE WHITE cat? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:21, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I checked, I don't think there's waste. And I know, right? xD 00:26, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she be shorthaired? Aren't all WindClan cats being redone to be short haired? (at least that's what I remember xD) Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

In her description it says that she has thick fur. Therefore, she has long fur. 22:36, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. And yes, usually all WindClan cats are sleek and shorthaired. It's different if they were described as long furred. 04:57, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the clarification :3. Blur the shading on the midriff a tad. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  14:52, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Midriff? Sorry I dunno where that is xD 15:36, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her belly and right infront of her haunch. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  16:50, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 04:50, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. ☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:09, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:07, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Dull the shading. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Reuploaded. ''' 04:30, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone
Alright, I don't want to hear the complaints about this being redone. Scarletwind stated herself that the warrior image need to be redone as well. The coloring was off between the two, and the shading was a little blotchy. Plus, I tried to add stripes but I really couldn't. OA was Darkhallows, added stripes. Comments? 17:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The white looks orange. Make it white. Lighten the shading, make the strpes thinner and add more. Define the ear pink and add depth to the eye. Define the white as well. 17:30, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've covered as much as I can with these stripes, and the artist who redoes the warrior can copy this style of stripes. Derp, I also noticed I forgot the collar. 17:48, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I never redid his warrior charart, but this is fine. Make the colors match his warrior charart a bit more and thin out the stripes a bit. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 20:18, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the title. It was supposed to say Billystorm KP. Rainface star  Ghost time!  20:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

THere seems to be a small speck of orange on the tip of the tail. That supposed to be there? 22:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If you still see the orange at the tail, the changes are in the file history. 23:09, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Splashy, plesae make the stripes thinner and add more. 22:43, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, make it less red. ;3 Senbonzakura ''' Dance of the Cherry Blossoms...  01:03, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Lionstar (L) ~ Redone
OA was Sandwich989, and it needed stripes and the shading redone and since it only had one image, i redid it. Comments? 19:29, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, it's very bright. The stripes a little awkward, they look orange and the fur is light ginger. May just be me, but desaturate them a tad. ☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have a problem with the stripe colour. 21:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't either. I think it looks good. Add more depth to the eye and blur/smudge the left earpink. 00:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes look amazing, Iceheart, so don't change a thing. Lighten the shading a tad though. 06:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 22:17, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you dull the earpink a bit? Its too neon. 20:56, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Applefur (W) - Tweaked
Alright, original artist was Honeyfur :3. Tweaked the shading, fixed the mottles, and altered the base color a tad to make her more brown. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:25, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading a lot. 22:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you mottled the earpink too. Define the earpink and make it a solid color. 02:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And there's a random stripe running down her back. Any way to get rid of? Sky- Stealing all ur  candy 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. '''better~? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:31, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred and the mottles look more like dapples. 20:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Spiderstar - Tweaked
Bah, I've done better, OA= senior Oblivion and I added teh patch on his shoulder- 02:01, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

No! I wanted to do this one!!! xD Perhaps not so many black lines on the left side of the patch? Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 02:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps change the earpink color so it doesn't look like the skin. Nice work. 02:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I cant do anything about the earpink, srry - 02:47, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like there should be more shading on the wound :P I'm not sure how you're going to do that, though.... but try anyway <span style="">03:37 Tue Oct 11

Reuploaded - 01:47, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Birdflight (Q) - Redone
Her stripes and shading needed to be redone. The original artist was Maplefern. So yup, comments? I have approval from Scarletwind for redoning this btw 02:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 06:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't want to do much to the earpink as I got it straight from the warriior charart. 12:42, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her pupils look dialated. Can you make them smaller please? Very pretty btw ^^ 20:51, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! 22:54, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Atelda, she looks kinda.. cross-eyed. Try copying the eyes from Daisytail, Daisy, or Brook. :3 03:55, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Her eyes look good to me. I'd not like to see them changed, but if they're not how they're supposed to be, go ahead. :) Darken the shading a bit everywhere except on her front legs, and there's a little line of gray lineart on her front paw closest to us. Also there's a gray lineart dot on her front paw I described before, and all lineart actually on the fur on the back paw is gray. Except the seperating toe lineart things. If you don't know what I mean, tell me and I'll upload a second image with the gray parts circled.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 06:21, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

You're not uploading a redline to show where a small speck of gray is. Anyways, the lineart on that like on all the queens, so don't tell her to fix it, unless you want each and every user to go back and fix it on their images. 14:27, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also, eye style is artist's choice. 14:28, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. o.o 23:17, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose pink? 21:00, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenflower (ki) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow. Needed to be pale ginger and stripes like before. I really like this ^^ Comments for improvement? 18:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy...I love this! I am probably in tears because of how stunning this is. All I see is that you need to blur the edges of the shading and darken the face stripes. 22:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

...<3 Reuploaded 22:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less brown. Other than that, stunning! Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:02, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded and it was not brown to begin with. Glad you like it. 01:06, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the earpink. 14:37, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm only going to blur it a smidge because the area is so small. 15:47, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

The bottom of the earpink still needs to be blurred. Great work! 20:53, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Kestrelwing (Alt. MC) ~ Tweaked
Comments? OA was me :3 Shading was terrible. <span style="">00:16 Wed Oct 12

Blur the shading and ear pink. 00:18, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">00:43 Wed Oct 12

Define the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:00, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink larger. 08:03, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the shading. (Or highlights?) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 22:31, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">23:43 Wed Oct 12

Define the earpink. 20:52, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darkflower (Q) - Redone
Redid the charart. OA was Spottedwing. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:03, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:57, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights, as well. 22:11, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Icy. No highlight layer on this one. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ban you blur the haunch and tail shading more? Also, darken the nose color. 20:51, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) ~ Redone
Eww. Let's get this over with. I wanna do Creekkit. FYI, I have no idea who the OA is. There's too many different users to even to even think of who the OA is... Probably Bramble. xD 06:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I am not changing the colors of the base pelt, stripes, ear pink or eyes. Those came straight from the .xcf file of her elder image. Nor am I adding stripes to the belly. 06:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is really good! 06:40, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and add more stripes to the head. 08:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't tell me to add any more stripes, 'cause then it won't match. 14:02, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's some lighter pixels along her back, below her front and back paws, and at the bottom of the tail. Maybe you should fill them in? 19:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

It's how I shade, Moon. I erased part of what I shouldn't have. xD 19:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:58, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it. 22:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Crap, crap and crap. 22:29, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Not crap at all. Lighten the haunch, and you don't have to, but can you make the stripes a bit further apart? 23:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I've done better. Re-uploaded. If I spread them out, I'd have to re-do them, and that color combo is quite annoying. 23:19, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chest and hanunch more. 20:52, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandwich989, redone as a longhair. 21:25, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

It was also redone by me and I made it worse. xD Blur the shading. 21:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. If I blur it any more, it'll be blotchy. 21:39, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

That's fine. I wasn't expecting a lot of blurring, only a tad. Looks better now. 21:59, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

You can't blur it anymore? Do so, and see what happens. 22:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I tried. It looked really blotchy. Besides, Cloudy said that it doesn't need any more blurring. 20:26, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights then. 20:51, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

And lighten the front paw's shading, it looks like the paws are a different tone then the pelt :3 20:54, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:56, October 13, 2011 (UTC)