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Mothwing (E) ~ Withdrawn
Well, here it is. =) -- 03:05, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

You're better than me! DXX define the tail shading more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:17, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make it match the other images. 04:22, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I defined the tail shading. -- 04:24, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define where the ear pink is. It's kinda...like one giant blotch. Make it more triangle and define the overall shading.

Yes, I'm going to be that person, but I don't think she should get one. Being in the elder's den does not make her an elder. She wasn't retired, she was temporarily dismissed. If Dovewing and Ivypool were staying in the apprentice's den, does that make them apprentices? If Briarlight is staying in the medicine cat den, does that make her a medicine cat? And let's not forget about Brightpaw, who stayed in the elder's den as well. Show me where it calls her an elder and I will accept this image. Until then, I don't think she needs one. 10:43, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I redid the ear pink and defined the shading. And Loonie, I believe that concerns regarding the position should go to PC's talk page. -- 13:55, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Add a little more depth to the eyes. 15:15, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added depth to eyes. -- 15:18, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

All right, then if I have concerns about it, this image shouldn't get approved until said concerns are dealt with. Fair enough? 18:57, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

The stripe pattern doesn't quite match. Define the shading, too.

Your concerns should have nothing to do with whether or not the image is approved until the time comes when your opinion becomes the status quo. If your concerns pan out in PC and it is agreed that she was not an elder, despite being dismissed by Mistystar, told she'd be an elder, and sent to the elders den while Willowshine stood as the sole medicine cat, then the image and info can be removed from the article and deleted. That should not stop the progress of this image. 19:30, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oookay so I've been looking through the book and it turns out there is a point where Mothwing is called an elder. "As an elder, you will be well cared for." It's in chapter six, not nine ten, but there is a cite nonetheless so I drop my argument. 19:37, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:45, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also make it a little less pink?

Reuploaded -- 23:31, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern still doesn't quite match, also can you define the earpink? This is beautiful. 23:33, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define and smooth out the shading and lighten it. Make the stripes thinner. 23:33, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 23:41, September 14, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern doesn't match the MC. She has a sort of rectangular layout of stripes, and they are much thinner and sharper. 05:59, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 06:14, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

They need to be a bit thinner. This is gorgeous, Starry<3 13:07 Sat Sep 15

Blur the shading a little. This looks very good! ♫Purplemoon♪ Tonight's A Blue Moon!  13:15, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 15:43, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and thin out the tail shading. 15:49, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 16:06, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading on her limbs  18:36, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more and the tail shading still needs to be thinner. 18:39, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- 18:30, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

It still doesn't quite match the other images. 03:37, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Starry, do you want me to take over? 06:10, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Not yet, Shelly. Duck, how does it not match the other images? -- 06:13, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

The color is a little off, and it needs more stripes. =3 11:42, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the stripes. 07:46, 19, 09, 2012

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Reuploaded -- 00:20, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it just a tad more. 11:32, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Well done, Starry. 83

Reuploaded -- 14:39, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

This looks really good. I think CBA? 15:04, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly blur the earpink a leetle more? Man, this is beautiful <3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  16:16, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot, define the "highlight" on the tail, try and make it match the other images better (stripes, colors, dapples...) and make the earpink match the other images too. 18:42, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? 03:32, September 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yes! Sorry. How does it need to match the other images better? (will reupload with the blurred earpink soon) -- 03:36, September 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the base color just a bit more darker so that it matches her other images? 22:23, September 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 20:39, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

If I'm looking at the right version, please smooth out and lighten the shading. Also, make the earpink match her other images. =) 21:06, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:48, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more, especially on the tail, and blur the earpink. 22:53, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 23:04, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 21:45, October 1, 2012 (UTC)

Give the shading some depth 00:45, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:01, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes need to match a lot better...try sharpening them, and make them less wavy.

Reuploaded -- 01:18, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading.

Define the lightsource on her tail. 20:33, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 20:52, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

Well done, Starry. CBA? 17:28, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes still do not match. Try redoing them with a size one pencil. These are too wavy, and and they should be spread out a little more.

Define the earpink and I'd suggest erasing some of the shading on her tail, to define the lightsource, but the shading could just be me. 17:34, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

I've decided that I am no longer going to work on this charart- I would like to withdraw it. -- 03:39, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120923200241!Shellyheart.png 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me.

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinx the power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.  Charlie  Let's   go to   Candy Mountain  02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

I couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows  call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/5/56/Giratina_orig.gif Crystals   over   Sparks  http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/2/27/Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. -- Đark ɦallows  06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? 20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
Looks like Firestar! :o He was described as ginger as a kit. Comments? 04:32, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cutee <3 >3< Blur the earpink on our left a tad. 19:02, October 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine.

Define the shading on the side and legs a tad? 22:59, October 4, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 17:28, October 8, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh's in the process of moving and won't be back for a few more days, I believe.

Cinderpelt (Alt MC 3) ~ Declined
So liek, Kate said that Cinderpelt's leg would be repaired in StarClan. Cite's in her trivia k guiz. Comments? 10:07 Wed Oct 3

Blur the earpink. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 15:34, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:21 Thu Oct 4

Is it really necessary to do alternates for cats after they are dead? I feel like we decided they wouldn't get them... at some point. I might be wrong though.-- Đark ɦallows  06:41, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

We do do alts for cats after they're dead. For instance, when Oakheart was called a brown tabby in Mistystar's Omen. However, in this case... I'm not sure it deserves an alt. Of course she was healed in StarClan. All cats are. If you want to go by this, we might as well make alts for things like Longtail having his sight back and Graypool with all her fur still there and all that happy haha. It's a given that cats that go to StarClan get healed of the injuries they suffered in life, I really don't see this as necessary. -- 19:27, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly. This really isn't necessary, honestly. There's a difference between being mistakenly described as something, and having an old wound/injury healed.

Oops! I guess I was mistaken. Sorry about that.-- Đark ɦallows  15:16, October 7, 2012 (UTC)

I say that if we ever make a StarClan blank, then she could be shown like this, but until then, I don't think she should get this. I'm going to go ahead and decline this, feel free to discuss if you feel otherwise, however. 01:42, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Ashpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Ifail...anyways, comments? 00:18, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Ashheart.apprentice.png 00:30, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Darken her just a tad and define the shading.

Toadskip (W) - For Approval
- It sucks badly I know ;W; Comments for improvement? 00:34, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot his white splashes xD 00:37, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded:  I tried. 00:42, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

The splashes are too blurry, make them a tad bit sharper and blend them in the direction of the fur lie. The earpink also seems a little bright, could you tone it down? Very nice! 01:39, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 01:44, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

The splashes look kinda flat, mayber smudge them? 03:13, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe have the splashes radiate from the belly and legs, since he's confirmed to specifically have white legs, for a more natural look? And have some of the splashed in the middle of the charart and not just along the outline? 03:25, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blizzardwing (W) - For Approval
ImadethisasssoonastheallegiancescameoutbecauseItotallyhavealife Oh, dem impossible cats always make for the sexiest ones <3 Comments? 00:40, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the shading less blue-ish? 01:23, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

I like it like that. Maybe it's darker out and that's making it look blue. 01:31, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a little bigger, or define it if it's big enough as it is? 01:38, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:41, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a touch paler 03:13, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (Ki) ~ CBA
NNNNNNNNNUUUUUUUUUUTKIT. 8D 00:42, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading /just/ a tad. Omgnutkitsocute. We are not worthy of his sexiness.

Re-uplaoded. We are not worthy. -bows- 01:40, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink on our right side? This is amazing =) 02:45, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. pfft 03:11, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

I can't see anything wrong with this, so I'm going to CBA it, mmkay? :)  03:48, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewing (W) - For Approval
He. Is. Awesome. =D Comments? 01:22, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the shading along his back and the place where the top of the arm and haunch meet more. 01:36, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

This is just a little thing of mine, but darken the base pelt every so slightly.

Re-uploaded 01:54, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Duck, you're amazing when it comes to black cats. Well done. Just clear the waste around image.

Silverflame (E) ~ CBA
Blegh, shading sucks x.x Comments? 01:43, 09, 10, 2012

Well, this is sexy. CBA? -shot- 02:25, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Marmalade (K) - For Approval
I fail at stripes if they aren't thin ;w; I decided to be a rebel and try out a new style. Sorry if he looks a bit cross-eyed ouo Commentos? 02:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fix dem eyes gurl, and define ze highlights. Sexiness <3 02:27, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Splook this is freaking amazing. -steals- You gotta add the shredded ears~ 02:29, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful. <3 Define the earpink please. 02:43, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes some. And what are you talking about, this is amazing. Looks darn near realistic to me :)  03:32, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Marigoldkit (ki) ~ For Approval
-despises- ugliness x.x comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:48, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define/add the ear-pink, define the shading/highlights, and the depth in the eyes 03:12, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add some white, and blur the darker ginger parts. 03:14, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -hates- I don't think changes show. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste around the charart, I have a nifty trick to get rid of it if I haven't already told you. The markings on the legs and tail looks a little pixil-y, blur it a msidge please? 03:25, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah.... I'm sorry, I can't do this. x.x I really, really hate this and honestly have no desire to work on it anymore. Anyone can take over. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:26, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

I know I'm no longer in the project, but I wouldn't mind taking a stab. 03:28, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Any questions? Or can I just sit and bask in my awesome for a bit? 04:07, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems a tad dark, lighten it a smidge? Very nice Shelly <3  04:11, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nettlespot (W) - For Approval
Yay for ginger/white kitties! I so call her queen Just kidding xP Comments? 02:50, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! The color chosen for the earpink looks odd against the ginger and white. I think that the flecks are not necessary on the ears, but if you keep it, the color should be changed (darker, I think) 03:21, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:39, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a little fluorescent pink. Tone it down a tad?

Re-uploaded 04:01, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Jay (KP) ~ For Approval
Meep. Comments?

He's sexy! Can you define the light a touch more on the top of the shoulder? 03:11, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowpaw, I think, noticed she had no teeth even before she spoke. Could you sink in the mouth a little? Also, either you forgot to color in the collar or erase it XD 03:19, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Uh, Ivy, I swear to god I have no idea how that's possible. Umm... a little advice on how, perhaps?

Does this help? 03:30, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

Are you using the male lineart? 05:12, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I switched and forgot to add the rest back on... I'll fix it in a sec.

Newtspeck (A) - For Approval
Newtpaw! I based her design from a Fire Bellied Newt, and an eft, the infant stage of a newt, while keeping it in the realm of realism. I'm going to play around with the shading more, it sucks XD 03:16, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

-stares- I love this. The way you did the design is just perfect <3 Define the gingery parts more. 03:18, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Mintkit (Ki) -for approval
Mintkit <3 stress reliever. I love tabbies but honestly, I don't really like this x.x Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 03:47, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. It's hard to tell it's an actual tabby. There's also waste.

Wait, since when is he a tabby? If you've read it somewhere, please cite it in his description. This also needs to be renamed File:Mintkit (YS).kit.png. 03:53, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Erase ze waste and lighten the ear-pink 04:04, October 9, 2012 (UTC)