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Stoneclaw (W) ~ For Approval
Trying this with GIMP. -- 23:09, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink?Broken_Foot

Define the shading on the tail 23:11, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Base color doesn't seem to match other images

Smooth out the blotchy parts of the shading on the back and neck, and define the shading on the paws and the haunch. 23:15, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Why are the legs farthest from us lighter than the rest of the body? 23:31, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I colorpicked from the StarClan image and checked again and it is the right base color. And in my reupload I couldn't seem to get rid of the waste so can somebody who knows GIMP tell me how? -- 23:38, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Not to state the obvious, but there's lots of waste around the whole thingBroken_Foot

Well for GIMP, go to your lineart layer, fill the outside of the lineart in red, and then use the color select tool to select the red. Then, erase the red, then go to your shading layer and erase the waste there (make your brush super big, for it to get it all). It works on any layer, actually. Also, define the light. This really does look darker than the star, unless you picked from an area that was shaded on it.

There's leaking shading along the back and a bit on the hind leg closest to us. Also, define the shading on the tail, and the light on the front legs. 23:52, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little 00:23, 4/01/2017

Reups --  00:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's a lot of gaps in the earpink--can you fix that? 00:52 4/1/17 (UTC)

Reups --  01:29, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur the lighting (if the lighter parts on the <-- side are lighting, I'm tired) and earpink and possibly match the eye color a bit better? 01:50, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink some more and define the shading and shading depth some more. ~Patch   feather~   13:27, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  15:47, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading around the head and hind legs a little and smooth it out. ~Patch   feather~   16:46, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  17:05, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back paws and near the flank and define the light on the front legs. ~Patch   feather~   18:13, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

So this are the main colors I used for the StarClan image; the base color is 757575, then for the shading mainly 454545, for earpink A59090. 18:24, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the colors! c: --  20:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

smooth the lighting more 22:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

The eye colour is still quite different. 23:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:28, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Make the lineart black. 03:34, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reups --  15:22, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there's still color leaking onto the lineart 17:51, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I tried..but I don't know how to fix that. --  18:24, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try just replacing the lineart layer; some parts look dark gray. Overlapping the lineart layer should fix any problems like that. Also, smooth the paler parts, because this image shouldn't have any, and it kinda looks like it does. Besides that, define the light on both front legs and round out the shading on the rump.

Reups I tried to replace the lineart but that one turned dark gray too. I know it's because of the shading but I don't know how to stop the shading from coloring the lineart. ._. --  18:39, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

The layer with your lineart should be the topmost layer, or second topmost depending on how you do your eyes and stuff. Basically, the lineart should be above the base pelt, shading, highlights, ect.

Reups I tried to erase some of the color on the lineart. --  18:47, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit 20:49, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  21:54, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smooth it out.

Reups Now I have a feeling it's too dark :c --  01:58, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Fox, you need to really smooth out the shading everywhere.Broken_Foot

Shading's also leaking away from the lineart a little bit on the foreleg closest to us and on his underbelly (unless the underbelly was intentional?). 20:50, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading depth. 02:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

where's his pupil? 19:02, 4/06/2017

Still working?

His pupil is on the left side of his eye. --  23:06, April 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * No, there needs to be a pupil visible in the eye. Look at some other warrior images for reference. The eye is just the blank model for the warrior image. 15:22, 4/08/2017

Eye style is artist's choice. I can see it and I know it's there. It's fine, and you're being picky. I've even made warrior images with eyes like this in the past.

Reups --  20:04, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading overall, I really can hardly make it out. 23:51, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:59, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 00:01, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit imo

Reups --  00:17, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's gray leaking all over the lineart, please make sure it's black. I also think you could define shading depth, and maybe lighten the shading on the legs, it looks like his legs are darker than the rest of his body 00:36, April 10, 2017 (UTC)


 * Make sure what's black; the shading? Shading tint is artist's choice. Also no to the lightening the shading on the legs, get rid of some of the shading on the legs, to define the light source. Define the shading everywhere else as well. 02:01, 4/10/2017


 * I am sure Snow meant making the lineart black since there is some gray leaking over it. 02:18, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, that was definitely a comment about the lineart, Winter. Also, I'm going to disagree with your comment about lightening the shading. Even if Foxey gets rid of some of the shading, it's still going to be a tad bit darker, so lightening the shading wouldn't hurt in the least.

Reups --  23:00, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. 13:47, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:13, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

The shading along the back appears to be leaking away from the lineart. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:02, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's still a little gray leaking onto the lineart, particularly on the rump and base of the tail, and could you smooth out the tail shading a bit, there are some lighter hard edged pixels towards the top of it 18:30, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:43, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth overall, an define the shading on the face some.

Honeyleaf (Q) ~ CBA
Can't get the stripes right >:( Also, wasn't sure if I should put "For Evaluation" or "For Approval 23:55, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Nah it can be For Approval, since you've got your first image approved already.

Define the shading depth. :) This is great for your second image. 00:03, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Your sig is changing the words below it. can you fix that?

nvm

Reuploaded Shading depth defined. And I know, I wanted to make my sig bigger but it also made the timestamp big so.. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 00:35, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thicken the stripes on the front legs? They are a bit thicker on the other images. 00:58, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs, define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 01:00, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Her stripe pattern doesn't really seem to match her other imageBroken_Foot

I think it does. 01:43, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I kinda agree that the stripes don't look great, I think they're more swirly on the loner image but it's just hard to copy on this blank also I'm new at this   04:22, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, they're pretty curvy on the loner image. If you're not sure how it was made, Scarlet is still active from time to time and I'm sure she could give you an idea from where to go. She's the one who made that pattern.

Reuploaded I didn't talk to Scarlet yet but I tried to make the body stripes better 21:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:34, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:32, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define her paler parts a bit more, and I don't think the earpink really matches the loner. Also, the stripes should be more swirly on the <-- haunch/leg and the <-- side of the back.

Reuploaded I actually colorpicked from the loner but it's hard to tell what part is earpink and what part is fur so this time I colorpicked from the deputy. About the swirliness of the stripes.. I wasn't exactly sure exactly where you were talking about but I think I fixed the trouble areas 00:21, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading 17:50, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:52, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back, and on the --> side of the cat some, most especially the chest

Reuploaded There isn't supposed to be any light on the chest really, but I blurred the shading and it looks lighter so there ya go 00:11, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

In your source, there would be light on the chest. Also lessen some of the facial shading, and add some light to the under-the-tummy back leg 02:02, 4/10/2017

Reuploaded Ok so I did lessen the facial shading, and gave the chest some light but I don't want to add anymore light since I was copying the shading from another queen and that one didn't have any light on the chest 04:25, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, because I wanted a little  more shading on the face  04:48, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the pale parts on the chest - they look sharp

Reuploaded I knew there was something off about the chest lol 23:52, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg farthest from us? Also define the shading on the one closest to us. 13:49, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I copied the shading on Brightflower's queen image and it didn't have any light on that back leg so shouldn't it be fine? 20:49, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gave in 20:58, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Erase away a little of the shadow on the left cheek, I feel like it shouldn't be completely in shadow with this light source. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:06, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

I've seen other queens with this exact same shading placement and there's no light on the left cheek 03:13, April 12, 2017 (UTC)


 * As per Snow, not every light source has to be 30000099% correct :I 13:00, 4/12/2017

Also the pale chest part looks like it needs to be smoothed out a lil more 13:14, 4/12/2017

Reuploaded 18:39, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the < front leg's paw a little? 18:45, 4/12/2017

Reuploaded 18:55, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the pale chest on the --> side of the cat to fill in that spot near the lineart. There's two other images, one from each side showing the paleness, which means it needs to reach all the way across.

Reuploaded The color on the chest was the wrong color oops so I fixed that too 02:12, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 13:12, 4/13/2017

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
Shading is annoying. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed out and define the dark splotch on her ear?Broken_Foot

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 17:52, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth shading some more and define it on the legs? 19:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:41, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little more, define the light on the legs and tail. 20:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:42, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little. Also, I think the belly shading should extend further ---> way, towards where the haunch overlaps the underbelly. 22:24, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a bit? 23:40, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you move the splotch more on the ear and define it? It kind of blends in with the shading on the side of the head 01:10, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:54, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on both front legs and the back one farthest from us, and smooth out the shading a bit? 17:41, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's a little piece on the belly near the hips where the shading is missing. 22:47, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the belly and a little way above the base of the tail 00:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit dark.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:10, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the <-- front leg near the lineart. 14:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The waste is still there :/ and I think shading could be lightened and smoothed some more  15:06, April 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * The shading darkness is fine, Snow. But I do agree on the smoothing of it 02:05, 4/10/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Not to be rude, but I cannot tell the difference between each of your uploads. I noticed only little to no change to your image. Excuse me if I come off rude, but I really can't tell the differenceBroken_Foot

Smooth the shading.

Just thought I'd point out that the waste is still there- right below the belly, and a little at the top of the image above the tail 23:59, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's a reddish marking on the lower part of the belly that I don't think is supposed to be there. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:10, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:46, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste around the whole image 22:34, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Loki(KP) ~ CBA
Eliza, do you like it Uptown? It's quiet Uptown....Broken_Foot

Can you imagine, smooth out the shading? Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:11, April 11, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Define the eye depth a smidge?

The shading is fine as is. 00:52, 4/12/2017

The < earpink is very purplish and is a very different colour than the ---> ear pink. Also, smoothen out the ---> ear pink. 00:54, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

That's from the tinted shading.Broken_Foot

Then could you like change the tint? The purple earpink would look kind of strange. Please dont yell at me please dont.

The tint looks fine, and if I change it to-lets just say black-then it might blend too well. And to be honest, I like the dark blue tint. Soooo, second opinion?Broken_Foot

It's fine. Define the eye depth a little? 03:31, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I know there's no replacing what we lost, and you need time..Broken_Foot

Broken, stop with the its fine and second opinion crap. Its getting way out of hand. Of course you can see it fine, its your image. When someone tells you to change something, change it. This is an approval page for a reason. 12:59, 4/12/2017

Did you smoothen out the ---> ear pink? 13:58, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

The nose should be black. <span style="">14:55 Wed Apr 12


 * Sorry to intrude, but it is not a requirement that black cats need black noses. Just so long as it is not neon pink. So the nose color is fine. You're all being really picky, and it needs to stop. <span style="">18:44, 4/12/2017

Define the shading depth on the collar, and the light on the --> front leg. And, to be fair, I don't think Sun meant to be picky - it's just an assumption many make. In reality, it's artists choice, and I've been told the same in the past. It's fine either way, and imo it's not fair to tell people to stop when they're just trying to make helpful suggestions.

No, Skye told me the same thing. It is not a requirement to make the nose black on black cats. I'm just repeating what was told to me. Plus, everyone is being really picky. <span style="">19:33, 4/12/2017

Jeez no need to be so hostile. I've been made to change it to black many times and have never been told that you could have it be anything other than black. Sorry. Wow. <span style="">20:01 Wed Apr 12

Re-uploaded! When you come home from school and find people arguing on your image o.OBroken_Foot

While it's not mandatory for the nose to be black (I actually think this is something Breezy told me when she was still around, and I trust her word on genetics and pelt styles a lot), it should be a darker color, not bright pink, unless they're cited with it. A lot of my black cats have a very dark red (borderline black, honestly), as their nose pink. Perhaps you could try that instead.

Re-uploaded! I was going by your word, as you once said the nose color has to match the earpink. But I changed it anywayBroken_Foot

I can't see the pupil of the eyes well. I think it's because it's too sparkly.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:05, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! When your baby dies and there ain't nothing you can doBroken_Foot

CBA? <span style="">13:11, 4/13/2017

Stemkit (Ki) ~ CBA
I guess his name is kinda cute 03:04, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't the tail shading be along the topside of the tail? Ignore me if it's a-okay 03:28, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

It's fine? I have so many kit images that use this exact same source. Stop being so nitpicky.

Define the shading depth a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:04, April 12, 2017 (UTC)Rainbow

Could you actually expand the shading a smidge? <span style="">13:21, 4/12/2017

Define the stripes a smidge. I can see them, but not very well

Reups 18:42, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the stripe parts that are under shading? Ik its the shading tint, but they blend in, and should be a bit more visible.

Reups Let me know if I need to define it more. 19:57, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">13:10, 4/13/2017

Sun Shadow (D) ~ For Approval
Makes me want to sing Fireflies by Owl city. ..

I am such a damn idiot. . ..

The eye colour looks more gray than amber. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:49, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

I colorpicked from the loner, though it does kind of look gray. Return later.

Smooth the shading some

I question if the loner's eyes were every changed... for eye color, it's probably better that you pick from the ancient cat image; you'll get a better range of colors that way.

re-up Eye depth is hard on the deputy.

Define the light on the back leg farthest from us? 02:59, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Define the light on the tail?

re-up Size 10 and size 5 brushes are my friend.

Icewing (A) - For Approval
White cats are fun to make! 22:54, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

I think you saved it wrong again. The image is too small. 22:56, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out shading? Also mind defining eye depth too?

Reuploaded I tried making it bigger using Paint.NET since GIMP just made it even smaller. :P 00:10, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

No matter how big you make it the lineart is gonna be blurred. 00:11, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the furthest hind leg? And it looks like there are specks of shading missing on the shoulder and flank. 00:15, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still can't belive I got it to be bigger! :D Now I feel like the lineart is too thick. Yeah, I fix it later. 00:34, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

I have an idea so you dont have to go through much trouble. Maybe save the lineart correctly, overlap it onto this drawing, erase the original lineart, then fill in anything that's left blank. It might not work but idk 01:39, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aah, much better. Sorry, Danny, I already finished when you said that. 01:58, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems blotchy. Maybe smoothen it out or something else :) 02:19, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Lineart looks kinda blurred. Fix that? (It's probably my eyes . . . just saying)

is the image cut off in places or is that just me <span style="">02:53, 4/13/2017

Haha no I can see it too, and the lineart is still too thick in some places 02:54, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit. 04:35, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

I suggest pasting the linear art over it. If you need the full size, it's here: http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Apprentice.long.png

Swankit (Star) - For Approval
First tabby & first StarClan kit. I was so anxious to get Running Fox approved so I could reserve this :P 02:27, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit? Nicely done, Danny, I'm quite impressed with this. o.o

reups Thank you! I'm pretty happy about how this turned out. 02:35, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

This is very, very, very amazing. Great job on this! Define the shading depth a tad? Also, I know how you feel.Broken_Foot

reups Also darkened the stripes a tad. They were looking more dark gray to me. 02:45, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Harespring (L) - For Approval
you go Harespring! 03:31, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the smudges. They're a bit softer on his other images (also just as an fyi, the warrior is the first in this set, if you're unsure of colors and pattern).

Smooth out the shading a bit? (I love him <3) Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:07, April 13, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Re-uploaded. 13:21, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Lightningtail (Star) - For Approval
This is not an image I wanted to ever post. I am not okay with this at all and I kinda want to curl up into a ball and pretend it didn't happen.

This is nice, define the shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:06, April 13, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Define earpink in <-- ear.

Deerpaw (TC) (A) ~ For Approval


Brighten up the white flecks <span style="">13:10, 4/13/2017

Reuploaded

I think they could be brightened up a bit more, and could you smooth out the shading?

Reuploaded In any case, most of the flecks are under shading, so they're bound to look a bit darker.

This is just a suggestion, but you could give the white flecks a little more variation.

Morningstar (L) ~ For Approval
15:18, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Some of the shading from the --> front leg is leaking onto the <-- side of the haunch

Eaglekit (TC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 17:23, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth?

Reuploaded. 21:30, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Patch Pelt (Ki) ~ For Approval
feeling this one a lot more 21:41, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Max (Ro) (KP) ~ For Approval
My little winged masked marauder >:3c <span style="">23:16, 4/13/2017