Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 96

Firestar (Alt L 5) - For Approval
Another one, Squid? Why, yes, Because I have too much fun making charart! Can't stop and won't stop uwu. I like this one, I'm just not completely sure if the longhair blank was the right one. I'll change it to short if needed. All colors picked from the image File:Firestar.GA2.png SquidwardPlays 22:46, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

He seems to be shown as a shorthair, so I'd say use the shorthair blank. 00:17, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I did it, but when I went in to convert to short, some things had seemed to have gotten messed up and/or deleted, being the muzzle color, earpink, and shading, so i redid those things too. The new shading might be a bit light, but I'll fix it in a bit. SquidwardPlays 00:47, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Would you define the light on the tail, when you do go to fix the shading. 00:57, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

There's some weird black line beneath his feet.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:24, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Along with Potato's comment, the chest fur looks weird to me. 𝕊𝕚𝕝   𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 06:53, 12/31/2018 ]

Shouldn't he have a slightly defined paler muzzle? Malina457 (talk) 15:45, December 31, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you define the light on the < front leg? There'd be a little more with that source, I'd think

Define the earpink a bit more, it blends in with the pelt.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:24, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reups To be honest, I hated it when I changed ti to shorthair,so I redid it completely and I like it more now. Re-colorpicked from the image best i could. SquidwardPlays 00:05, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

It might be just me but the eyes seem a tad crosseyed. 00:17, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. There's been several leader images with that pixel placement. Could you define the light on the front legs and <--- haunch? 01:58, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, I think the light could benefit from being defined everywhere. 05:51, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

This looks really good so far! But his eyes seem a little dull of color compared to the image. I don't know if you have to or not, but you might have to add the stripes on his forehead. idk COOLcat9352 (talk) 20:38, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Defined light, and the eyes should be fine. I still picked them from pixels of the image's eye. and I did actually consider the forehead stripes, but I want another opinion just incase before I do. SquidwardPlays 21:06, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Oops, it cropped wrong. SquidwardPlays 21:08, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste everywhere.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:57, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reups SquidwardPlays 22:12, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

If they're on the image, then yeah I would add the stripes. There's still little light on the legs. Try erasing some of the shading so the pattern between the shaded and non-shaded part is visible. Right now it looks very flat. 22:25, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Squidward, would you like to continue working on this? The leader blanks are up for redo and the blank artist forum will go on. Do you still want to work on this or keep it for when the new leader blanks are approved? 03:56, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

I still want to do this alt, though i'd like to stop work on it until the new blanks are ready for use. SquidwardPlays 03:57, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving to clear up space. Said user will have first dibs when the leader blanks are done.