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Strikestone (A) - Redone
OA was Shinx, redone design. 21:06 Tue May 15

I know it may be hard, but could you define the shading on the tail and face? I love this design! Needletail 🐾 #Litten 03:43, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

So far, no luck getting it defined without completely masking the markings. I'll keep trying, but I may not be able to without it looking gross lol 02:07 Sat May 19

The tail shading already looks pretty defined to me. On the face could you possibly just expand the shading a bit? Or would that still mask the markings?

Don't worry about my comment- I think it's fine now that is see it more. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 16:00, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (K) ~ Redone
to match micah for colors of base/stripes/pale parts, removing texture, ended up redoing shading because the old tint clashed and such

Define the shading. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 01:44, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

also if this needs to match Micah in terms of pelt length (he's long) then I can do that, but then we also need to add the honey pelt's alt to the tweak list^ not sure if it does though

Why would it need to match? Identical does not mean they have the same exact pelt length. 13:09, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the leg shading. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 15:59, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Honey Pelt (W) ~ Redone
^^

Define the shading on the tail and legs and define the ear pink. This is cute! Needletail 🐾 #Litten 01:44, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Can you blur/smudge the shading more, whichever you prefer?

Reuploaded

Can you define the ear pink a little? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 15:59, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded that's about as defined as I can get it; it's being quite finicky ~

Strikestone (Ro) - Redone
OA was Shinx, redone design. 02:06 Sat May 19

Could you lighten the shading on the paws? Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 15:58, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Teller of the Pointed Stones (OTS) (H) ~ Tweaked
OA is Oblivion. <span style="">03:45, 5/19/2018

There's waste around chest, -> ear, and tail. Also, could you darken the shading overall a bit, smooth the belly shading, and add some shading to the top of the tail, back paw, and the space between -> front leg and the back leg

Fixed. I won't put shading on the tail tip, around that area, because I'm using the original source. <span style="">04:56, 5/19/2018

Ah ok. I'm still seeing a few pixels of waste by the chest, and the space between the front legs, at the top, could you smooth that shading?

I know it's probably the mud, but I'm still having trouble seeing the shading overall. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 15:58, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the shading fine.

Fixed. Not much I can do for the shading between the front legs, it's on the original file, which I don't have. <span style="">18:41, 5/19/2018

I'm sorry to argue but it showed up when you tweaked it and it's very sharp and dark. Are you sure you didn't add any shading there?

Echosong (MC) ~ Redone
Redone to make the stripes flow better. Color from the older mc. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 03:51, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye depth? Her eyes are supposed to be deep green, after all

The eye color is fine. I honestly think this is becoming picky. 10:19, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

I said define the depth, not change the color itself. My comment is not about the color, and other people comment about eye depth, what makes my comment picky?

The color is there. The way I do the eyes make it lighter. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 17:11, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Redone
I will be redoing the stripes. 14:13, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Actually no I will not be. They match the leader just fine. 14:23, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot. Define it on the head and define the lighting on the back leg closest to us. Looks great, as always. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 14:26, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Should I lighten the arm shading more? 14:34, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe just define the light on it. Also the scar placement doesn't seem to match the warrior or leader, it should be pointing towards the chest

Re-uploaded: I redid the stripes to match Hawkfrost's deputy. 21:28, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (Ki) ~ Redone
He was so cute and innocent as a kit. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 14:54, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Define the earpink?

It's just the color. I can lighten it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 17:38, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (W) - Redone
OA was Mount Everest, with a tweak done by Spooky and Vec. Redone so stripes all match. 15:43, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

White chest shows more in the stripes and the 2 pixels near the chest need to be transparent. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 15:44, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:28, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Bramblestar (A) - Redone
15:45, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Isn't this just a tweak? And there's waste around the chin/chest area, and all of the paws

Icy, did you upload? o.O I'm not seeing it in the file history. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#438134; font-size:85%">17:37, 5/19/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">) ​ <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#438134; font-size:85%">17:37, 5/19/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">) ​

Re-uploaded: be quiet everyone this never happened  it was under the wrong filename, apparently I forgot that Bramblestar is not Brambleclaw anymore    17:55, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Ohhh hehe whoops I thought the June 2017 was what you just uploaded. Anyways shading's leaking away from the belly area next to -> arm, and I think a little bit at -> front paw and -> back paw. One pixel of waste at the top of the tail. And the stripes on this don't seem to match Hawkfrost's apprentice. Were you looking at his images or just the other Bramblestar images?

I was looking at Bramblestar's warrior, actually. If that does not match ... what should we do? 20:20, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Just matched Hawkfrost's stripes. Tigerstar's deputy will have to be tweaked. 21:28, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Clovertail (E) ~ Tweaked
21:55, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Did you tweak the color? I don't see a difference. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 22:22, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

forgot layers, its right now 22:29, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) ~ Tweaked
Recent OA is Raelic. <span style="">22:05, 5/19/2018

Heavystep (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color

Heavystep (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color