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Tom (KP) ~ Withdrawn
Here's Tom. Not exactly my favorite character. Comments? 03:10, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading a bit, but they do look pretty neat.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 03:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and darken it a bit.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 16:28, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit more, but especially the shading on his right paw and haunch, and his face. I love his charart, amigo. 20:15, 05/18/2014

Darken it a bit more too. Not much, but just a little more.

Define the ear-pink 21:32, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the stripes some? They don't look so much as stripes as they do texture o3o 21:34, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The stripes are actually meant to be texture. Not sure if changes are showing yet. 22:04, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

If they are texture, then he needs stripes, since copper pretty much means ginger. 00:00, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did not realize that. 00:35, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't the stripes be ginger? After all, it's just his muzzle that's described as moleskin-brown o3o 00:36, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Do the stripes have to be ginger? I probably could change them, but it will be hard without redoing the whole image. 18:34, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

If he's copper, and if it doesn't mention that he has moleskin stripes, sorry, but yes, they have to =P. However, you can click the box that says "lock" (if you use GIMP) so you can paintbrush in the ginger without messing up the stripes. Also, add some stripes, and try not to make them triangle-ly. Wish you luck on this one man! c: 18:36, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There was no way I could have done the stripes without redoing the whole image. I originally made this on a school computer, which didn't have gimp and I wasn't able to download it, either. I was stuck using pixlr, and the only way I could blur the stripes without over-blurring them is if it was on the base layer. Now that I'm at home, I was able to restart using Gimp. I used all the same colors as before (except the stripes), but took off the texture. Hopefully this works. 19:43, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading some? 19:45, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but I'll change if someone else agrees. 19:48, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

I'll agree with Beebs- but remember, define doesn't mean darken, it means make it more visible, by whatever means you think is appropriate. I'm also not seeing very much light here and it looks like most of the image is in shadow? I think defining the depth might help here.

Reuploaded. 21:56, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

I'm a bit confused as to where your lightsource is coming from, can you define the lightsource please? 18:27, May 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I totally redid the shading because it was awful. That should have (hopefully) fixed the lightsource issue as well. 20:47, May 20, 2014 (UTC)

Also, changes are not showing. 20:48, May 20, 2014 (UTC)

Darken/define the stripes on the head? They seem pretty faint. 15:24, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

I'm just gonna sneak in here and rename your file to File:Tom (Cat).kittypet.png because the page was named incorrectly therefore making the filename wrong. Since tom is also a term for a male cat and such, I renamed the page.

The stripes on the head are the same color as the rest of the stripes, so I'd rather not change that. 02:10, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the light source? 13:08, 05/26/2014

Reuloaded. 17:41, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Are you shading with black, or with another color? If you're using black, try a different color, like a darker brown or darker red or something along those lines. The image kinda looks like it's turning grayish, and my guess is it's because of the shading..

Reuploaded. 22:51, May 27, 2014 (UTC)

He still looks grey. Tint the shading a bit more, perhaps? 00:19, 05/29/2014

I don't think the muzzle should be brown, it just says dark 08:36, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I changed the shading color again, as well as the highlights' color, to more of a reddish-brown color. As for the muzzle, I originally thought that moleskin ment a brown color, but now I think it might just be comparing the way his muzzle feels to the skin of a mole, so I changed the muzzle fur to a slightly darker shade of the stripes (thank you, Beebs, for letting me know that locking the layers on Gimp allowed me to change only the colored areas of the selected layer; saved me a lot of hassle). Changes not showing for me. 16:14, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps add a dorsal stripe or something along those lines to his back? Idk, the stripes don't seem very natural and I think the dorsal stripe might help fix this.

Define the overall shading 23:33, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I decided not to add a dorsal stripe; the stripes look natural enough to me. Changes probably not showing. 00:45, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I'm not understanding how they're natural? Did you use a reference image when you made this? If you did, I'd like to see the stripes. They don't appear natural to me at all.. please add the stripe.

I agree with Skye...please use the dorsal stripe. 01:07, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The stripes are sort of based of tiger stripes. I actually did try to add a dorsal stripe earlier, but found it difficult to do with the perspective of these blanks; I struggled to get the stripe to flow with the rest of the body. 18:30, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 0:31 Mon Jun 2

Actually, Blue, the dorsal stripe looks pretty damn cool how you have it. Just add maybe a stripe or two in that blank area. =)

Reuploaded. Thank you, but can you please not use language when talking to me? Even the "minor" words bother me. Changes not showing. 16:06, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a little bit more. As for the language, I can comply with that. Usually, most people don't mind "damn" since it's not really considered a swear word to most people, but if that's what you ask, then by all means. =)

Thank you. As for the shading, I won't define it unless someone says to after the changes are showing (you'll know when stripes appear on/by the back left leg). 17:02, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Changes can be seen (by me at least) and I think the shading needs to be defined/given more depth. 21:52, 06/2/2014

The stripes seem to fade away on the paws. Also, try to make the stripes go with the body some, in order to make it more realistic =) 22:01, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 22:21, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Could you give a link to the changes? 22:32, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this. This isn't working out for me. 20:17, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Mothflight (Kit) - Declined
Why is it so smalllll? Anyways, yeah, I can't art, and I'm not entirely satisfied with the shading (Shading on white cats >3<) :c. Anyways I'm not sure if I should add highlights or not, so, yeah. Also, my computer perception is wacked lol. 17:17, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Not bad for a first-timer, Bird! Define and add some depth to the shading. 17:43, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Could you also blur the shading some? This looks nice, Bird. 17:47, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

This needs to named File:Mothflight.kit.png. You can reupload over the file that's already there, Bird- it was never approved.

Yeah, I know, but for some reason the old picture just kept overwriting my own. x3  23:56, May 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I kind of want to redo the shading entirely. 00:03, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

She's looking beautiful, Bird. Perhaps blur the edges of the shading a little more, and then give it some depth around the neck and legs? If you're not sure what I mean, you're more than welcome to come and ask me in the chat when you're online.

Reups yeahdefinatelygoingtoredotheshading  22:20, May 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, it looks quite flat. Trunktail 19:39, May 20, 2014 (UTC)

I'm going to hold off defining it, because if I define it, means I'd have to blur some more, and what it looks like on my computer, that there's more shading than actual fur colour, so if more people say define it, then I will, but currently with all the blurred shading, I'd rather try and avoid it. 21:58, May 20, 2014 (UTC)

Give the shading some depth and define the light source 02:00, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I had to redo the shading, and added highlights, but I'm not going to darken the shading anymore, because if I make it any darker it just looks weird  16:30, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the shading and maybe add some to the head. ouo Remember what I showed you on join.me, dear? Try something like that for shading.

Enlarge the earpink a tad.

Re-ups I depthed it the best I could, (Even though depthed isn't a word hehe)  17:31, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Deepened is probably a better word. Blur the chest shading a bit uvu  Anais ♥ (talk)   17:35, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps add another layer of shading to give him some depth? If you need help with that, feel free to message me and I'll show you ouo 17:45, 05/26/2014

I'm using Pixlr right now, and I can't lock layers. (Not that I didn't know how to use layers lol) -- 18:05, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

I hate to sound like a broken record, X3 but could you blur the chest shading a tad? Neverendingmoon (talk) 01:25, May 28, 2014 (UTC)Moony

Re-ups -- 17:21, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the shading more. =P

Reups 20:01, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face and blue the edges of the shading on the chest a bit more. 21:41, 06/2/2014

Bird told me the other day she no longer wanted to work on this and I totally forgot to decline it.;;;

Dawncloud (Star) ~ Declined
comments? — 20:14 Wed May 21

Make her a little more on the ginger side? I almost forgot we finally had a cite for her actual pelt color and wondered why she looked different.

Her other images don't have texture and a pale belly o3o 23:05, May 21, 2014 (UTC)

reups — 00:08 Sat May 24

Another nitpick, but aren't her eyes supposed to be blue, like the other images? 15:28, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? 00:03, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

reups sorry! — 22:22 Fri May 30

Darken the base and stripes a bit to matched the tweaked apprentice. o3o 22:27, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I believe that the tweaked apprentice should match this since this was posted first. 22:32, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Thing is, it is literally impossible for it to match, since unless Wild is out there with the files, I can't make it match 100% with the StarClanner. 22:34, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes seem to be a tad over-blurred/smudged when compared to the apprentice and the other images. Also it's just a bit easier for Bloo to match the apprentice, due to her possessing the file for this image. I think the choice should be agreed upon by Beebs and her, though.

reups changes here — 23:42 Fri May 30

She looks light brown, not light ginger. 23:27, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Since it now got archived, make her match the apprentice's colors, and this can go on CBA. 13:16, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Still working, dear? 20:19, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Hawkheart (Star) ~ For Approval
I've never done flecks/mottles before.. so critique is kinda needed on that. Color picked from his Medicine cat image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:54, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't you already have an image up? Neverendingmoon (talk) 23:08, May 23, 2014 (UTC)Moony

If you look in the comments for Whiteclaw's, I withdrew so i could work on this one instead.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:11, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Add some earpink, define the light on his legs and tail, and make the flecks and mottles match his other images more. I'd recommend asking the OA of one of them for the file, so you can get the right colours exactly and study the pattern properly. Also, this needs to be named 'Hawkheart.star.png'. 23:14, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Re-Up.  Added highlights to his tail and legs, and i changed his mottles. Does that look better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:07, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think you should define the shading a bit more. Think about where your light is coming from. Is it coming toward him from the top left corner above the hip and tail? Then shade along the right edge of the face (our right) and the tops of the front legs, and the right of the chest and the bottom of the belly. If it's coming from the top right corner above his head, shade the left side of the face, the bottom of the front legs, shade a little on the left side of the chest, shade a lot on the lower left side of the back, and the tail. Just think about where the light is coming from and where the shadows would fall on Hawkheart's frame. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 01:57, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-Up. '''Does that look any better? I couldnt make it to dark, because it was starting to make his mottles blur a bit..~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:20, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and face shading some. 15:32, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up.  Added darker shading. I'd rather not define the ear pick anymore so it still matches his other images, since i color-picked it from his Medicine cat image.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:50, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define means to make it more visible, by whichever means you wish. It doesn't always mean changing the color. It honestly just means make it so we can see it- perhaps changing the lighting in the ears, shifting the style, ect.

'''Re-Up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 19:04, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and define the light source 05:55, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-Up. '''Smudged ear pink and difined the light source.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:03, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light/shading on the tail? Beautiful image, Breeze! 16:51, 05/26/2014

Re-up.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:49, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you make the grey more visible?

Define your light on the paw closest to us, maybe? And smooth out the shading in the top of the closest ear a bit, it looks a bit blotchy (might not be the right word I'm using) 17:35, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. added more gray mottles and smoothed out the shading a bit.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:05, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is swallowing the tail. Lighten the shading on the tail, and define the mottles on the tail as well. The light on the tail could also use some defining. 00:10, 05/29/2014

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:05, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

The mottles need a lot ore defining on the tail. It looks solid, tbh. 21:38, 06/2/2014

Re-up. Defined the mottles and shading on his tail. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:51, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere - it looks a bit flat. 22:03, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I didnt want too make it too dark, since it makes his mottles blur alot.. same with the highlights. But i added more shading too it, so please don't complain that his mottles are blurring. :/--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:51, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink some more. 20:52, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:10, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Alt.Q) ~ Declined
comments? — <span style="">00:48 Sat May 24

Do you mind possibly reddening the ear pink a little bit so I can see it a bit better?

reups, hows this? — <span style="">00:56 Sat May 24

That's better, thank you. Maybe give a little more depth to the belly shading? If you don't want to, that's cool with me. ^^ Another stellar charart, dear.

Also, define the shading on the face and chest, too. Pretty! 15:32, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? 00:03, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

reups changes here — <span style="">23:45 Fri May 30

Define the shading on both front legs.

Define the shading on the upper part of the tail too. <span style="">21:36, 06/2/2014

Still working, dear? 20:19, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Dappletail (Queen) - For Approval
Not sure if I got this quite right. It looks alright, but it doesn't look quite as bright as her other images, even though I pulled the colors right from there. Let me know what you think. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 23:44, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source on her back and hindlegs. this is really great, Jay :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:53, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Dunno if it's showing up, but I added highlights on the belly, back, face, tail, and legs. Hopefully that helps. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 04:09, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Yay, the changes are finally showing up! Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:10, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Remove the white background. Loud star  I see cats with stars in their pelts. 17:56, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Done. The reason it had a white background was I tried uploading it as a JPG from my iPad, which seemed to let the changes show up. I re-uploaded it as a PNG without the white background, but I can't seem to get the changes to show up. :/ Any suggestions? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 18:02, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

The changes are on this link: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140530C/ezimba19266726720400.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 18:25, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the markings. This is amazing! <span style="">23:35 Thu May 29

Sharpened and brightened some of the markings. Hopefully that looks better. Changes are here: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140530C/ezimba19266775965500.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 23:49, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on -> front paw. This is gorgeous.

Aw, thanks. :) Defined the shading on the leg and paw. The changes are here: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140531C/ezimba19266720869600.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:40, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the closest hind leg a bit. 13:14, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

I defined the shading, and I also made a few other changes in an attempt to make it look more like the other Dappletail images. Let me know if you like this version or the last version better, I have both saved: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140602C/ezimba19266721982700.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:00, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Add a small highlight/light to her furthest hind leg, make sure it is blurred/smudged/smoothed out enough, and this will be good. 22:04, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Added the highlight, and also added some saturation to the yellow patches, especially on her forehead. This charart has been bugging me, but I think I'm finally happy with it. Any more changes you want me to make? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 03:25, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Ah, dangit, forgot to actually link to the changes. :P Here: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140604C/ezimba19266766311100.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 03:26, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Just define the light on both back legs and the front furthest from us Flawless :D   10:49, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Defined the highlights. If I add any more highlights to that left back leg though, it's going to blot out the color. I hope this is alright. Here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140608C/ezimba19266729550000.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 19:55, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Boulder (Star) ~ For Approval
throw me your commentses <span style="">13:30 Fri May 30

Blur the stripes just a little bit- they're a little too hard-edged compared to the other images.

Shouldn't he have a shredded ear or am I just being a derp? Neverendingmoon (talk) 13:04, May 31, 2014 (UTC)Moony

Maybe shredded ear, but the question is, do cats heal when they die? If so, no shred. 00:01, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

If the cat's injuries aren't said to be healed, then all scars and nicked ears stay. In this case, I don't believe his ear was ever mentioned healed. 20:58, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yea <span style="">08:11 Tue Jun 3

Can you upload the changes to iaza or somewhere so we can see them?

Molepaw (NP) (A) ~ For Approval
Please bear with me on the sloppyness, I've not made a charart in ages ^_^ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 14:49, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

The file name needs to be File:Molepaw (NP).apprentice.png. Would you like me to rename it for you?

Yes, please, I don't remember how. V_V <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:19, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. Only 'ops can rename files, hence why I offered. Reuploading under a different file name just duplicates files and makes it messy. As for the image itself, could you darken the shading, define it, and depending on how it looks after that, you may also want to darken the base pelt, since he is black. Try just fixing the shading, reupload it, and see how it looks- if it's still too light, then darken the base pelt. I use between #171717 and #0E0E0E, but the darker you get, the more difficult it is to shade. Seeing the lineart in all places is not mandatory, especially on black cats.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Although I don't think the changes are showing :/ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:52, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

I believe the entire muzzle needs to be gray, and sort of smudge the part where the gray paws meet the rest of the leg; smudge it into little 'tufts', since it looks rather abrupt. Not bad! 16:54, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Upload the changes to iaza or tinypic and link it here, that way we can see the changes. Wikia's being a butthead with images right now.

Re-uploaded, but Wikia's still being a butt. I smudged the muzzle, too. Here. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 17:06, May 30, 2014 (UTC)

Could you darken the pale gray some? It's bordering off-white. 01:53, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Here <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 06:49, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Darken it a touch more. 23:29, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''In case Wikia's still being stupid, here. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 08:20, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Darken it some more - it still looks a bit close to off-white. 22:05, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Pale gray is an off-white. I think the paws are fine.

Still working? 21:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Bright Stream (Star) - CBA
I'm not entirely happy with the way the markings fall on her back, but I figured I'd let people give suggestions on how to alter it. Any thoughts? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 00:23, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

She doesn't have texture on her chest. Also, her white seems a bit gray, and her tail markings could be a bit less smudged to match the rogue. Nice! I wanted this one ;-; 00:25, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

I hope this is better? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 01:08, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, think you can smoothen out the chest highlight? Also, for the white, I recommend using pure white so that it doesn't look so gray o3o 01:11, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the white circle highlight on her chest a little bit, (Bbun beat me too it xD) and add a little more depth too her eyes. Looks great, jay :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:12, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Blurred the shading and lightened the white parts of the fur. Is that alright? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 01:34, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

The paw to my >>>> looks really gray, and also, smoothen out the shading on it. 13:13, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Changed the shading so it fit the shape of the leg better. It still looks a bit gray on my laptop though. It looked fine on the iPad. :/ Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 17:10, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the belly, paws, and muzzle shading. 23:42, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on >>> paw a bit more? Not sure if changes are showing yet, but it looks almost entirely gray to me. Perhaps blur it more? 23:59, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Better? Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 00:25, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, better. Very nice job, Jay. 18:18, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading for both visible paws.

I can't get the changes to upload, so they're on this link instead: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140603C/ezimba19266796015000.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 21:31, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading on the left leg on the "elbow" and a tiny bit more on the right paw. Nice job! <span style="">21:34, 06/2/2014

Changes are here: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140603C/ezimba19266728373700.png Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 21:51, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 21:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Morningflower (Queen) ~ For Approval
Not very proud of this one.. never done a tortie before. I think i might of smudged her markings a bit too much.. oh well. Comments? ~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:06, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the patches just a tad bit. 01:04, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:11, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. I'll promote you to apprentice as well due to your knowledge and understanding of the basics of charart making. =)

The patches could be sharpened more. 23:42, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear? <span style="">21:27, 06/2/2014

Like Appledash said, the patches need to be sharpened more likeo n her other character arts, also, to match the other character arts she could use the underside of her tail being white. Brick  15:17, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Flight (Q) -  CBA
wow imma derp… here's flight. All the colors are from her prey hunter. And if someone gets around to it, do ya wanna move this to legit name imma dero     never mind, i got it   04:02, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Then you may want to put the KM file here instead of the queen one you dork. =P

Yeah, I should probably mention that this file's been named wrong the entire time, Scar. The correct file is File:Flight.km.png. Tribe cats are kit-mothers, hence the km abbreviation.


 * Re-uplaoded, I think… 21:25, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, that's the right file, dear. Define her facial and tail shading.

Re-uploaded 02:46, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

I it me or does she look a bit cross-eyed? The eye on our right should be pointing a bit more towards our wight, I think... Other than that, I see nothing wrong. <span style="">21:31, 06/2/2014


 * I think they look fine; that's how I do all of the queen eyes. But I'll fiddle with the color contrast if more people agree 22:56, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Ah yes, let's go five days without a comment. Sorry, dear. CBA?

Mapleshade (Ki) ~ For Approval
OMG Mapleshade is so fluffy. ;-; This is my first charart for the Warriors Wiki. Comments?

Define th shading a bit more, and add a few highlights. Also add a little more depth too her eyes (You dont have to do this one, its just preference).~Breezeheart~ (talk) 13:09, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Highlights aren't mandatory.

Re-uploaded ~ Added a bit more shading and highlights. Hope you can see it (when the re-upload finally appears on the wiki :/ ).

The white is really gray on the tail, so brighten that up a bit. This is really good and matches quite wonderfully. .o.

Although this was supposed to stay as "for evaluation", since you obviously understand the basics and what it takes to make a charart, I'll let this stay how it is and promote you to apprentice.

Re-uploaded ~ Made her tail brighter. I had to upload the new one twice before it appeared on the wiki. >~< Hope it's better now. Thanks for the praise! :3

Could you make the tail shading just a little darker? She's so cute :o  Anais ♥ (talk)   14:46, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ I darkened the tail shading, but I hope it doesn't look too gray again. ^^

Define the shading everywhere but on the tail. 23:30, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ I'm not really good in defining shading on small pictures (or I just don't understand what it means ^^'). Better now? (If not, can anyone tell me please how to define shading?)

Fircone (alt Ro) ~ For Approval
I honestly don't think that mottled is my thing. Comments? <span style="">17:44 Sat May 31

Define the shading, its barely visible. Also, try blurring/smudging the mottles a little bit.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:56, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think both are fine, but if someone else agrees, I'll change it. <span style="">0:42 Sun Jun 1

I agree with both. 13:58, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading everywhere except the belly + back could be defined, but the mottles look fine. 23:41, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">0:43 Mon Jun 2

i think the mottles could be blurred a tad 06:45, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">20:38 Mon Jun 2

Define the shading a bit and perhaps smudge the white specks a tiiiiiiinnnyyy bit? <span style="">21:29, 06/2/2014

I think the shading is fine, although I don't think the changes for the new image are showing. Click here for a free muffin and coffee <span style="">0:44 Tue Jun 3

yeah can you define the shading more, the different colors just make it harder to see 00:10, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:34 Fri Jun 6

Wind (Q)- For Approval
Hello hi I did Wind's queen, if changes don't show it's right here''. Anais ♥ (talk)  '' 17:44, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and back. 23:39, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Belly shading is fine, imho. Define the leg shading.

Define the shading on the face and tail, and the front legs. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 00:26, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Anais ♥ (talk)   00:47, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

The shading in general should be blurred thoroughly. 22:27, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

Pixie (Lo) ~ CBA
14:51, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. i kinda want to eat her 20:52, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs a bit. ^Now I'm hungry for Pixie Sticks. Trunktail / Brick  holla holla 20:59, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

David doesn't blur the shading on his chararts. He smudges them.

But it should still be smoothed out in some way. 22:26, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm just saying he doesn't blur his shading? o.O I honestly think it's fine, but okay. I don't ever remember super smooth shading being a requirement.

re-uploaded im not going to make it look smoother because then i might as well blur it ._. 00:05, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the face please. 00:09, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded im not defining it any more so dont ask after this 09:55, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Windflight (Star) ~ For Approval
The images' tails don't match, so I used the elder's. Comments? wish me luck 18:29, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

On the --> paw, the stripes go across the fingerclawthingy paw segments weirdly on the back higher up one. I hope that made sense. Good luck! Brick 20:23, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, unless someone disagrees, since the stripes are supposed to be in that similar manner. Also, try to use better phrasing next time, dear, since I barely managed to understand what you said ^^;; 21:21, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

re-up I did fiddle around with him a bit, though, to make him match others a bit more. 23:03, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

and if anyone wants to see the changes 20:46, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define/darken the chest shading.

re-up did some other minor stuff too 23:01, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-up more stuffs done 23:39, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? <span style="">16:37, 06/8/2014

Whiteclaw (Star) - For Approval
My first StarClan charart. Comments? Brick 20:18, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Edity-boop. Showing a version by another member, the pic I made is here http://i59.tinypic.com/25070yc.png Brick  20:19, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, fixed some issue I had with lighting on the face. Link is http://i60.tinypic.com/350kto4.png Brick  06:48, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Whiten the paw some - it's looking gray. 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, hope this is better! http://i62.tinypic.com/110xaiu.png Brick  21:06, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink some - it looks a bit too bright. Also, try using pure white for that paw - maybe it'll make it look whiter. 00:10, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I accidently uploaded an old file instead of the newer version, fixed version issss here --> http://i57.tinypic.com/w1xt9j.png Brick  13:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, especially on the white paw. <span style="">17:02 Sun Jun 8

Cinderfur (Star) - For Evaluation


Hey so I saw that Cinderfur was on the list for characters needing art, and I'm all like WOO I LOVE THIS GUY. So, here you go. shading i'm so sorry    20:42, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 20:44, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Erm... this isn't the file I uploaded. Wikia, what the heck?!?! 20:45, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the thumbnail of the one you uploaded on the recent photos bar. Define the eye depth and chest shading. Brick 20:50, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups (hopefully Dang it Wikia!)  uggg shading me no likey 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

If it still isn't showing for you (as it seems to be doing for me), I'd reccomend uploading it to an image sharing site like tinypic or Photobucket. Brick  16:45, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Do not use photobucket. That stores the images in albums and things like that. Tinypic is good, and I also think ezimba is a good one.

Oakheart (Alt W 2) ~ For Approval
(it's the fox-coloured alt, it was agreed months ago) Ah, I remember withdrawing this so long ago :p glad I could get back to it. 21:16, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Make the ear more pink, it looks quite beige. oh my starclan i love that texture      Brick  14:58, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Ear pink looks fine to me.

Hmm, maybe try making the tail texture go with the fur more? As in, make it curve more with the tail. Nice job, dear. 00:12, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Reups gracias~ 18:30, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (Alt Ki) - For Approval
21:44, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Upload the changes elsewhere, please. It's only showing mine. =/

Arg wikia. Here he is c: 00:07, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the body itself. Also darken it and expand it.

Re-uploaded 15:17, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Expand and blur the shading along his back.

Re-uploaded 00:11, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back a little more? <span style="">17:58, 06/8/2014

Russetfur (Lo) - For Approval
Dazzy's reservation ran out so this is mine now. All colors are from Russet's starclan image 01:09, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Her stripes look a little thinner than on her other images, can you make them slightly thicker please? Brick 14:55, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Looks alright to me 20:42, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Her stripes kinda fade into the shading. I'm not sure how to explain how to fix it but I'm sure you know how. Sorry for not being able to be specific ;-; <span style="">16:34, 06/8/2014

Poppyfrost(Q) - For Approval
changes this was fun c: 21:27, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Why does it look like she has stripes on her? o.o She needs to be dappled and if you have them, I'm having a rough time seeing them. Also blur the transitions between colors, and blur the shading on the white a lot. At the same time, define the shading on the non-white.

Re-uploaded whoops I though those were stripes when I was going off of the kit lol 22:07, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Changes 00:10, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples just a littttleee bit more? <span style="">15:08, 06/7/2014

Re-uploaded 15:53, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Molepaw (NP) (Kit) - For Evaluation
Hmm...not bad, for my first. I think I did a pretty good job. Critique is apprectiated. 22:30, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

omg so cute good job I think you should lighten the shading near the paws a little bit. <span style="">21:05 Fri Jun 6

Re-uploaded, changes here ---> http://www.ezimba.com/work/140607C/ezimba11121565737900.png if not showing. 21:51, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Whitetail (Q) ~ For Approval
due to the light source of course she'll look a little gray. Comments? 22:35, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you please give a link to the changes? <span style="">16:29, 06/8/2014

Graystripe (Alt. W) - For Approval
No, I will not make him brown. Changes are here because I forgot to get rid of a layer. If you see white flecky things instead of a darker pelt, then changes aren't showing.

Define the shading on the foreleg closest to us? I can see the shading on the paw fine, it's just on the leg itself. <span style="">16:28, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded.

Quince (Q) - For Approval
I stole (not stole lmao since it's mine) the collar for Velvet, since both she and Quince are supposed to have the same style collar for the kittypet and queen images. Changes are here just in case.

Uh, it might be just me, but the picture file is normal lineart, but this looks thinner? o.o <span style="">21:38 Fri Jun 6

It's the changes. They're not showing on Wikia (but they are for me, actually), hence why I linked it.

Blur the belly shading a bit? <span style="">16:25, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded.

Tangleburr (Kit) - For Approval
First charart since joining again. Comments? <span style="">21:19 Fri Jun 6

I'm sorry but since you reserved after posting this, it may have to be declined... I may be wrong, though, so don't shoot me if I am. 21:30, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

-Shrug- Oh well. My chararts aren't good anyway ;~; <span style="">21:31 Fri Jun 6

Nah, it was only a couple minutes, as seen here, and sometimes it takes that long to post an edit somewhere. I think Cloud should be allowed to keep the image. I'd have no complaints. Some people forget the dates at first too and we let them slide.

Okie, just had to check~ ask Berry for the file of one of the other images, I believe Berry did those ones, so that you can get the colours precise; it looks a little lighter than the warrior, but it could just be my kindle. Define your shading and texture too. Don't you say that your chararts aren't good, Whisker; honestly, this is great, for your first in a long time! 21:49, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

I asked her, now I have to wait xD thanks sorrel   <span style="">22:01 Fri Jun 6

Re-up. Shading is a bit better, I think. Also defined texture. <span style="">22:24 Fri Jun 6

Define the texture a bit more? <span style="">21:37, 06/7/2014

Re-up. Also defined texture on patches. <span style="">23:01 Sat Jun 7

Runningnose (D) - For Approval
i'll just leave this here <span style="">00:30, 06/7/2014

He needs a gray muzzle. 00:34, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

reup <span style="">02:29, 06/7/2014

Tansy(Lo): For Approval
Eee I'm very happy about Fircone uvu! Here's Tansy! http://www.ezimba.com/work/140607C/ezimba18819864628800.png Anais ♥ (talk)   01:40, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading a little, thin it out a touch, and settle on one light source: the shading on the left and face suggest it's coming from the front of the body, but everything else says it's coming from above. Fantastic job though! 20:23, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Yes, I know the pattern does not match 100%, but this pattern was really hard, and with all the tiny stripes, I think I have sustained eye damage from squinting so much. You guys have no idea how long I've wanted to make a charart for this cat and now that I finally can is a miracle. <span style="">17:22 Sat Jun 7

Define the shading on the front legs, belly, and face? This is amazing Hawky~ <span style="">21:35, 06/7/2014

Re-uploaded. Thank youuu. <span style="">21:49 Sat Jun 7

Lighten the shading a little, And change the position of the white in her eyes because it'd be coming from the same angle as the light on her body. Good job! 20:20, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Brook (KM) - For Approval
changes  <span style="">21:31, 06/7/2014

Define the facial shading juust a bit. 22:20, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it just fine; I'd rather not touch it unless a few more agree. ^;;; <span style="">15:24, 06/8/2014

Just a tiny bit more. Love those eyes *.* <span style="">19:08 Sun Jun 8

reuploaded <span style="">19:20, 06/8/2014

Lighten the shading a little or tint it navy or something because her whole rear half looks black. 20:19, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt Q) ~ Declined
Changes here. Yes, she's supposed to be the not pregnant version, but I couldn't get it looking right. If someone could be a dear and make me a non-pregnant queen lineart, I'd be very grateful. 18:18, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

You're gonna have to wait, Sorrel. Since there are multiple characters that would need this, it needs to be done and approved. I'm going to have to decline this right now, and I'm not even sure what's going on with the non-pregnant version.. it was never said if we're keeping them or also redoing those.