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Mapleshade (Alt. DF) ~ For Approval
I was in a rush, so can it please be renamed? Sorry >< 13:39, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the white front paw Storm  &#9835;  13:58, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Er... Storm, both front paws are white. Which one do you mean? 14:57, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Renamed. 8D

Should the tail be bushy and tangled like the other images? User: Dewdrops56/talk 15:15, June, 12, 2015

Would it not make sense for the same edited lineart to be used for both images? Whichever one that is. 15:57, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

this is trying to match the ginger and white alts, not the tortoiseshells. and messy fur doesnt have to match. 15:59, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

My bad. The one farthest from us please Storm  &#9835;  16:03, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

I only suggest it because the linearts match for every other set of Mapleshade's alts. Also, perhaps dull down the scars a bit? 16:08, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

Ragged fur doesn't even really need to match in general, I think.. given that each image is a different point in a cat's life, the amount of raggedness, for lack of a better word, is going to change.

reups I went ahead and added a little bit of ragged fur lineart on the tail. But with all due respect, I'm keeping my lines instead of recycling Skt's. His lines are nice and all, buut I'd rather keep mine original. Just my two cents. also the apprentice images dont share exactly the same lines  16:21, June 12, 2015 (UTC)

I'm seeing lines on the white, did you add texture? I love it honestly but the other images don't have texture, so I think it has to be removed. 02:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

I think that's actually her shading, Stealth. I know I'm starting to do the same thing on my bi-colored cats, even without texture. it's a way to show depth and realism in the shading without having it monopolize the white and make it look flat.

Yes, that's shading. I have it that way to make the image look less flat, and to try and give more of an impression of unkempt fur. You're probably also looking at some of the stripes on the ginger. 08:13, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading. 10:08, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

reups, also tweaked the lines significantly. 22:03, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the belly shading just a tad, if you can. 16:48, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

reups 16:24, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

With light coming from in front of the face, the entire tail should be shaded, except for the part at the very top which connects with the spine. 02:18, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:16, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg. 03:12, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Which back leg? 11:36, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Oops sorry. The one furthest away from us. Also, would you mind defining the depth of the shading? 11:44, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (DF Alt) - CBA
I love silver tabbies.

Re-uploaded. Redid the stripes, as that did not fit Darkstripe and those were stripes I'd meant to use for something else.

Can you define the shading a bit? This is just as amazing as the last image. 02:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit 03:29, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. 8D I adore this kind of pelt style, and my OC is a silver tabby, so I'm pretty experienced with these and some of my best images have been silver tabbies...

Define shading depth on the head, tail and paws? 04:29, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the shading on his belly? 16:47, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Whole tail should be in shadow with light coming from in front of the cat's face. LOVE YOU 02:16, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. As per Leggy's suggestions on here and Skype.

If you can, could you define the facial shading? I can't see any. 14:50, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Not without it looking like pure black on his face, no. The stripes are placed in such a way that the shading would actually be where the stripes are, making them look like I just placed solid black on his face without doing anything to it. Although if you've got a suggestion for how I should define it, fire away.

Blur the shading a touch on the hunch? If you don't want to feel free to leave it and man...I love this. 08:55 Wed Jun 24

Re-uploaded. Yay a comment and thank you ouo

CBA? 13:45, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Clawface (DF) - CBA
I cannot match the scars for the life of me >< any help with it? 00:53, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's supposed to be battle-scarred, I think he could use a few more scars, wouldn't you agree?

Reupload I've also fixed the scars they are much better. 02:10, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit and add pink to the paw pads 02:53, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I looked up on paw pad colours, and if we just assume he is a mixed breed, darker coloured cats typically have gray/black paws, while lighter cats have pink. It can be a mix of grey/black with pink. I think Clawface is okay with his paw pad but if anyone thinks otherwise, I can lighten it and/or add a little pink. 04:30, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the scars. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 12:41, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading more and blur it or whatever on the back and tail. 12:57, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload So any snarling kitties! 00:44, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

You left the inside of the mouth white, and colored the front teeth the same color as the tongue. Could you make the teeth white/pale and the inside of the mouth a darker shade of the tongue? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:51, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the scars, please. I can only see two of them. 16:46, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the back shading just a little more. Define the tail tip shading as well. 23:53, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 06:54, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front right leg, if there is any. Might just be my computer though. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:15, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

The facial shading suggests light is coming from the right, so I'm rolling with that: remove all shading along the back and top of the tail (lined up with the back), cover the rest of the tail entirely in shadow, add shading along the belly, and add some directly behind the head, because it's connected to the body. Nice job though! 02:11, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I defined the front leg shading. The shading placement is to the right, not top right. I'd rather redo the face shading then the rest of the body shading. I've added a bit of shading around the back leg. 22:15, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't mean for it to be coming from the top right; my comment is for the right side, which the facial shading suggests. Top right or whole right side, the entire back should be in light, and it doesn't change much, if anything at all on the pose of these blanks. 22:17, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I do not see why I have to remove the back shading. I'd like a second opinion please. 22:22, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Erm, Leggy was one of our best artists, Stealth. She used to be a PCA lead a long time ago, so I think she knows what she's talking about.. The shading on the back contradicts the rest of the source. I know when I shaded Darkstripe, I imagined they were the loner blanks (as they use the same basic source), and used what I would have done on that blank for these. I agree with Leggy and I think you should probably remove that shading.

Since you don't understand, here's a diagram of what I'm trying to explain. Light coming from the right side would hit objects that bulge out, and objects that bulge out with thus create shadows on anything behind it. There's nothing blocking the back from light exposure with your light source. Meanwhile, the entire body covers the tail, so it would be in shadow, (although leave some areas of even darker shading on the edges to show it's still a round object). 22:38, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks for that Leggy! I've redone all the shading except his right legs and a little on his side. 03:44, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs. 13:01, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:00, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Hawkfrost (Alt. DF) ~ For Approval
I'm seeing these blanks everywhere now Jayie I love them so much! 01:09, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, please.

Re-ups 08:59, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading still looks dark - lighten it a few more ticks, please. 22:46, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 22:59, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture and add shading depth on the back 04:18, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 10:17, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading some more. It still looks a bit too hard-edged. 16:45, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture more on the tail. 23:58, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 09:53, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is still a little hard edged. Btw I don't think two highlight points (well, explaining) are needed on the shoulder...? Might be wrong :P I love his belly  S i l v e r m i s t i e   Dream it   Back to Future✼   01:01, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

It looks like your shading is coming from the right, so remove all the shading along the top of the back and add it onto the belly, behind the legs, and directly behind where the shoulder ends. Cover all of the tail in shading, as well, except for the very top, which is lined up with the slope of the back. Nice job! 02:09, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups – I completely redid the shading, but I didn't exactly understand what you meant by the tail shading. I also got rid of the texture as it seemed to make the shading look more hard-edged than it is 06:06, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

The whole tail besides the top should be shaded (the right side too). The shading still looks a little hard edged though. Can you blur it a little more? 13:44, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Snowtuft (DF) ~ For Approval
So many Dark Forest submissions, they're going like hotcakes! I've always had a soft spot for Snowtuft. 01:22, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading depth 00:26, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us and the light on the one farthest from us please Storm  &#9835;  12:33, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly expand the shading a tad everywhere? 16:44, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded, not sure if I made the shading too dark or not. 18:57, June 15, 2015 (UTC)'''

It is a little on the dark side, tbh. Maybe lighten it just a slight bit? Smooth out the shading a little more as well. Nice :)  00:40, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source, it looks a bit like there's shading all around the outline 06:48, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs? Also, the chest, back leg and tail end shading looks a little grey. Might I suggest tinting the shading to a colour other than grey, such as blue? It'll make it look less grey. 21:12, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? It's kinda flat at this moment I know, I swear I screw up way worse than you do when I shade white cats  S i l v e r m i s t i e   Dream it   Back to Future✼   01:08, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Wouldn't the scar show? If I remember right it said that he was sliced all the way to his belly  04:09, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

That's on his left side, I think User: Dewdrops56/talk 04:17, June, 16, 2015

Reuploaded 16:13, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading a lot more? And can you define the light/shading on his legs please? Storm &#9835;  17:06, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:09, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

If the shading is coming from directly above, more of the tail would be in shadow and there would be less shadow defining the top of the shoulder. Also remove the shading separating the tail from the rump, if that's the case. If it's coming from the right, add even more shading to the entire tail-most of the body would be blocking all of it out! Fantastic job on dealing with the white cat, though, because I still can't do them. 02:08, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Something came up so I won't be able to access my computer and reup the pic till Wednesday. Is that alright? I'm so sorry I can't get it up till then. 01:49, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Brokenstar (DF) - For Approval
I've made this piece of trash too much like chocolate and I want to eat him. Anyway, comments? Let's get this approved before Monday when I go on my last KS3 trip 01:48, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the scars and change the colour of the light part of the tail? It looks pink. 02:35, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

can you make his tail look more bent? i can hardly tell and he is named for it. 07:39, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Sorry, but I'd rather not touch the lighter part of the tail. It's the exact same color as the rest and I color-picked on the lightest pixel I could find on the rogue. 09:39, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts on the tail are the exact same coloring as the pale parts on the rest of the image- I would know, as I remember when most of these images were put on the tweak page and approval pages. The leader image is a good example- the pale parts clearly look pale and they're not pink. Where you color picked honestly doesn't matter, as it looks pink on this image, while it does not on his others. This is borderlining on the "it's fine and I don't want to change it" thing, and if you continue, I will be declining this. Where you color picked does not justify your comment- different shading methods will result in different colors.

Re-upped Exactly- The tail is the same color as the rest, that's why I was hesitant to change it only on the tail, and as for the color, I tried color-picking from the rogue, there was an unshaded pixel that betrayed the actual base color for the pale part, so that's where I got my whole pale colors from. There's really no need to pull out the declining threat when I say that I'd rather not touch the color because it came from one of his legit images. Now, I tweaked the pale parts a little, I'm not entirely sure if this changed anything, and I think it could be worse... 14:13, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

I'll pull the declining threat, as I am getting more than sick of the "it's fine" thing. It still looks pink, and I have that right as deputy of the project. The pale parts do not look the same, and I never said that they did on your image- I was talking about the other images in his set. Colorpick from the leader if you're going to colorpick, as the leader is the first image in the set, I believe. I never once said it didn't come from a legit image- also, I'm pretty sure everything is shaded on the rogue, given it's Scarlet's, and her shading and highlight style leaves no pixels untouched. If someone says something, then colorpick from a different image to satisfy the commentor- he has more than enough of them to chose from.

Add light to the eyes. I can barely tell them apart from the fur right now. 14:37 Sat Jun 13

Re-upped There, everything is from the leader. Also I would know f there is an unshaded pixel- since I zoomed in straight at the image to get a good color. I'm extremely tired right now and the last thing I want is another full scaled fight over "its fine" bullshit. I have tried to be well-behaved and I have tried to not pull out a direct "its fine" shit without good reason, but right now I really do not have any nerve to continue another fight over my first dark forest image. 14:41, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, if there is any.-- 16:44, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly no one should be too snappy about this. Burnt did this because we agreed that we can say "it's fine" for a reason. Her being wrong doesn't mean she was looking for an excuse. Anyway, blur/smudge the stripes a bit? They're kinda hard edged, maybe just on his shoulder. I like this :) Myself can ever do any linear edits besides a torn ear  S i l v e r m i s t i e   Dream it   Back to Future✼   01:14, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

From the angle your lighting is coming from, the tail would entirely be in shadow, especially the tip of the tail between the legs, as the front of the cat is bent down and the tufts of fur on the back are high enough to block out light to the top. Also add a little more shading behind the shoulder, leaking onto the belly, and behind the head, filling up more of the neck. This is pretty though! 02:05, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I can't really see the earpink, would you mind defining it? I really like this image though. Too bad you had to eat it 20:58, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Did I get everyone's comments? 05:55, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

is there any way to make the tail look.....less like its just a darker brown tail? i cant see the stripes or anything. 07:48, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I'm sorry, I lost the file and this was the best I could do ;; 08:55, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Tigerstar (DF) - CBA
sigh 09:56, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Try removing the eyelashes. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 12:42, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Is this a female blank? Storm &#9835;  12:56, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

You kinda just repeated what Silvercloud said... also, there's waste in between the tail and leg lineart.

Re-uploaded Female Tigerstar? lmao 14:24, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Make the mouth darker than the tongue. They have the same color. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 14:29, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please try to clarify that? Because i don't really get where you mean by "the mouth" on this blank. 14:36, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

http://i.imgur.com/1qFSyuF.png If you can not see it, try downloading the image. Look inside of the red circle. It is the spot you should darken. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 14:51, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

I think she means do something like this with the mouth, where it's different colors. I took the idea for that from Jayie's previously uploaded file that had examples for the blanks. I only give a zoomed in link because damn those are small. yes, that is my OC

Please add a scar going across the muzzle, as that's what's depicted in his leader charat. User: Dewdrops56/talk 15:02, June, 13, 2015

Blur/smudge the tail shading. 23:40, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope I fixed what everyone suggested. If I forgot to fix something please tell me 04:17, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

You forgot the rip in his ear Storm  &#9835;  14:25, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

My bad, it's on the ear that we can't see very well. My mistake. Also I came to notice that Tigerstar's pelt seems too light for being dark brown...same as Hawkfrost and Bramblestar... I think I'm gonna make a tweak nomination Storm  &#9835;  14:40, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

can you remove the scar on the outside on his tail? a cat doesnt have flesh there. 07:52, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg furthest from us. 21:56, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

It looks like your light is coming from in front of the cat's face. So, the whole tail should be in shadow, and anything lined up with the angle the spine is at (the upper back, upper neck, top of the head, part of the tail that connects with the spine, etc) should all be in light. Most of the belly would be in shadow, too. 02:24, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:38, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Beepaw (Ki) ~ For Evaluation
10:15, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and perhaps lighten it a little. 10:54, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. Looks wonderful for your first charart! Storm &#9835;  12:27, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, please. 16:43, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Soften the texture a little bit. Cute (: 23:06, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad. I like this! 23:59, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ 09:48, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a little bit more, dull down the texture some more as well, and add some shading between her front legs on her underbelly? Storm &#9835;  14:27, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

Why would she need more shading on her front paws and underbelly? She has enough there. I think you should lighten the shading a little more. 17:45, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

No, between the front legs on her underbelly. There'd be just shadow there, and there's not really enough. Storm &#9835;  20:48, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but I agree that it is fine. There is shading there, and there's no less than there is on a bunch of other images. 21:11, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Storm. The underbelly is approximately 3 pixels wide, and 5 pixels long. It does not need that much shading. 00:05, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups — hope I got it, I'm crap at shading, and Wikia won't let me upload the image to the correct file name… did I miss anything? 11:37, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a little more. 12:32, June 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather (DF) (DF) ~ For Approval
Eh... comments? 00:33, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. More shading on the bend of the front leg? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:10, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 14:38, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

youve coloured in the gap between the tail and leg. 15:06, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Oops. 16:01, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

With light coming from the front of the face, the whole tail should be in shadow, and anything along the spine (top of the neck above the head, top of the tail, the whole back, etc) should be in light. Also add a little mroe shading coming from behind her armpit, leaking onto the belly. Very lovely though! 02:21, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 17:15, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a little bit of darker shading around the outer edges of the tail to show that it still has some sort of shape to it. 23:03, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:18, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add shading on both sides of the tail? (You nailed the back, but it could use a tiny bit more with the same darkness on the front, to really show it isn't a highlight.) 22:39, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:44, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the main body shading, if possible? 08:09, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Flowerpaw (Star) ~ For Approval
Yay! My first StarClanner! Everything from the apprentice, as I have the file. Storm &#9835;  15:41, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Damn, shes gorgeous! Define the facial shading towards the top of the head just a tad, please. 05:30, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Which part of the head, I may ask? By the very top, or towards the side? Thanks Breezey! Storm &#9835;  05:38, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

More towards the top, near the ears. 08:35, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Not really sure where you wanted. Storm &#9835;  19:32, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, you got it. Add a little more depth to the eyes, if you can. 17:59, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Okie-dokie Storm  &#9835;  19:49, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

What a beaut! Smooth out the root of the tail's shading just a bit maybe? She's so preeeeeetty  S i l v e r m i s t i e   Dream it   Back to Future✼   08:09, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

theres like a weird darker strip around her haunch area, is that supposed to be there? 18:25, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstripe (DF) ~ For Approval
I tried 15:58, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Also, I am aware that it looks a bit flat - I'll sling in a few highlights on my next upload. 14:29, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reups that's better 16:35, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. 13:46, June 24, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (W) ~ For Approval
<3 Torties 17:10, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the shading on the front leg furthest from us. Also, maybe it's just me, but I think the shading might be leaking a little on the tail. 19:14, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink? 13:25, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Ice 14:00, June 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think maybe smooth out the shading and shrink it slightly on the head :) Nice!

Antpelt (DF) ~ For Approval
finally 18:15, June 23, 2015 (UTC)