Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 168

Deerfoot (W) ~ Approved
All colors from other images. Comments? 23:44, March 13, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the white on the chest, and brighten it on the chin? 23:45, 3/13/2017

Reuploaded. 23:48, March 13, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the head?

Reuploaded. 23:57, March 13, 2017 (UTC)

I don't know exactly, but I think you did his apprentice lol. Anyways, can you define the shading a tad? Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 00:33, March 14, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded. Yup, I did his apprentice image, as well as his kit and Dark Forest images. 00:38, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

The earpink seems to cover the rest of the ear going up. Though it might be me Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 00:41, March 14, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The reason it seems to do that is because it does. However, I've used that much earpink multiple times (Brackenfur alt 3 and 1, Lionblaze alt, Squirrelwhisker), and if I make it smaller, it would be hard to see. However, if others agree, I'll change it. 01:01, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine. 01:14, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paws?

Reuploaded. 02:37, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck? 23:35, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:49, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck and in the area that's near the underbelly, and define it on the upper back. 01:53, March 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:59, March 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more on the head, flank/chest area, and the tail? 13:34, 3/15/2017

Reuploaded. This is as smooth as it's going to get. For some reason, the mottles make it seem less smooth than it really is. 19:38, March 15, 2017 (UTC)

Looks great! CBA? 19:49, 3/15/2017

Approved

Nutmeg (TR) (Lo) ~ Approved


Define shading on the body? Looks good! Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 01:14 3/14/17 UTC

Reuploaded

Define the shading depth a tiny bit? 19:50, 3/15/2017

Reuploaded

Lookin good! CBA? 21:29, 3/15/2017

Approved

Lilyflower (Q) ~ Approved
All colors from the star 01:36, 3/14/2017

Could you move the --> pupil over to the left a bit. Idk if it's just me, but it seems cross eyed a bit. ;-; 01:38, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

It's not cross-eyed? I specifically made sure it wasn't ? 01:41, 3/14/2017

Those eyes though XD Define the shading a tad on the stomach? I just had a really bad memory lapse and cant remember if the whole thing of shading needs to be defined Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 02:05, March 14, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded -puts hands together- ya know. im dumb. and i apologize, they were crosseyed xDDDD, also this is as much as I'm willing to define the stomach shading, any more and my light source will be compromised :P 02:47, 3/14/2017

I second Broken Foot, I still seriously can't see the stomach shading (and facial shading, for that matter).

I'm confused why you can't see the facial shading? It's all on the right side of the face because of my light source. I'm not going to define the stomach shading any more, or it will be too much for the light source. 14:21, 3/14/2017

I'm not willing to argue, but even with this source, there should be at least a slight shadow underneath the cheek on <-- this side. And there's gotta be a problem if I pretty much can't see the shading on the stomach (it looks kind of flat, imo). But I guess you should just wait for other people's opinions about the stomach shading.

This is the last time I'm "defining" the stomach shading. If you can't see it, then you might need to change your settings. Also no to the face, as I know my source. :/ 14:57, 3/14/2017

I think I'm late to the game, but the facial shading is fine. It was just the stomach shading that was a wee-bit hard to see. Amazing job on this one though! Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 17:15, March 14, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

CBA?

Approved

Cherryfeather (Q) - Approved
05:24, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Ooo this is pretty! Define the shading on the > front paw some more, and I think there's some leaking shading along the line of the tummy? 14:36, 3/14/2017

The unnoticed waste-finder is here! On the > frontal paw, there is some waste close to the paw. If you're having a hard time finding it, it's between both the legs and close to ---> paw! Great image and color scheme! Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 17:30, March 14, 2017 (UTC)Broken-Foot

Re-uploaded 23:30, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

I really like this. CBA? 20:31, 3/15/2017

Approved