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Mist (KP) Kittypet ~ For Approval
Welp. I tried... 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged the collor. 02:49, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg, and blur/smudge the transitions between the colors on the collar if you can. It still looks a bit hard-edged. 02:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged it more and did some stuff :P 03:10, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

The color needs to match his other images, so it has to be lighter. 14:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Add some more light on the tail and add some shading to the collar. 21:45 Sat Mar 7

Tiger, Mist has no other Kittypet images. So I don't know the original collar colour. 21:34, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, I mean the body color, not the collar. It needs to match the loner and kit images, so it needs to be a lighter shade of gray. I suggest to colorpick it. 21:44, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I'll brighten up the collar later. Couldn't change collar colour because I don't know what it originally was :/. (I'll clear the waste in the next upload) 22:05, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 2nd try... 22:17, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Since apparently I needed to move the files, this has now been renamed to Mist (KP).kittypet.png.

Lighten him up more, hes still quite dark as he is now. 01:02, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 05:00, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up the shading as well 18:01 Mon Mar 9

re-up Any better? I lightened up his fur colour from the kit image. 22:47, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading makes it look like he has a dark stripe down his back, kinda like Graystripe.

How do I change it? Do I lighten it up, Smudge, blur... 23:19, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I hit publish without reading over my comment. x.x Yes, lightening it should probably do the trick.

re-up Lightened the shading. 23:31, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and light on the tail and define the light on the foreleg? 19:18, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up Boop 18:13, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Give the shading a little bit more blur, and also delete some waste around his right back knee, it’s just sudden shading that I don’t think belongs there. 07:31, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Give his eyes a little more depth? 13:54, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Depth as in..? 14:34, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Depth is the gradient of the shading from light to dark. I think the depth looks fine but could you maybe define the shading a little on the legs? 14:38, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Would you be a pal and shading to his back leg? 08:36, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

I don't understand where the light is coming from due to the shading on the haunch, face, and tail. 17:04, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading? I'm sorry if I sound like I'm nagging your image ;.; I actually really like how you did it 11:02, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit... too dark. Try lightening it up? Sorry, I may not have the right to comment because I'm not active, but the shading could be lightened up a few percents in transparency. -- 15:48, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine to me but if ya want to, go ahead. Either is fine by me. Could you define the lightsource for me? I'm having trouble seeing what direction it's coming from clearing. 18:40, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up 1st: Changed the eye colour and position because the loner and kit images had brighter eyes; 2nd: I wanted to try to figure out how Beebs did her shading on the Mist she did(didn't work out). 3rd: I dont know if I answered everyone's replies... 20:12, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, and also define the shading on his visible front leg. 02:23, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

I think the eye deapth is fine on my Mac computer, PC, and Mobile. I'll get to the shading tomorrow. 02:27, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with breeze- please define the eye depth. Maybe put a darker blue where the eye color is the darkest? 07:53, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Done :P 19:24, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the edges more. I suggest you use a hard edged blur tool at a rate of 100. 00:11, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

I'll try using the Blur tool tomarrow, since I've actually never used it. I really need to learn Shading Technique with Hawky Dx 02:51, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

on the right haunch, The chading looks like it is looping around the line of the start of the tail. try smudging or blurring it there. otherwise beautiful! Spottehwobble!

define the leg shading a tad 20:50 Thu Mar 19

his nose should be dark grey, not pink. 13:38, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a bit from the (our right) back leg. Also, it that waste in the gap between the back leg and the front leg? It could just be my monitor, however. 15:56, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up First time using Blur tool. How does it look? 16:00, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-up looked too dark the first time.. 16:05, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and I can't tell where your light source is coming from, the head tells me it's coming from the right and the haunch tells me it's coming from the left 03:51, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Ancient) - CBA
- bleh... 01:49, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Gimme secrets on Charart making ;.; yours is so pretty define the light on the back paw? With this source I'm sure there'll be some light. 02:45, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:46, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading please, it just makes the gray seem too dark compared to her queen is all. 05:58, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

The texture is softer on her other images. 09:57, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:47, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make her texture a bit less visible? This is beautiful! 05:46, March 20, 2015 (UTC)

the texture looks just fine to me 20:49 Fri Mar 20

I love this - she looks all soft. Would you mind defining the shading on the front legs and the tail? 15:58, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded because I have two conflicting opinions on the texture, I'm gonna leave it be until I get another opinion 22:54, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think the texture could be softened, just a bit, to match her queen. She's sexy :3 03:50, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:24, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? I like this. *.*

Squirrelflight (Alt W) ~ For Approval
I. Hate. 13:56, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the back and on the head. The shading could be defined on the back ear, though. 14:12, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

uh that's shading depth. And I think it's fine, bc I can see the pattern through it. 14:14, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

I forgot, Where is her white paw? 14:15, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

It's an alt, she wasn't mentioned with a white paw on the page so I doubt she needs it 14:22, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

On her Queen alt it seems she has a white paw. 14:24, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Oh she is a beauty! Maybe define the ear pink a bit? ☽ Sunstream  ♥Aidan + Wolfie = AYSHABAH!☾  14:25, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Her queen alt is the non pregnant queen blank, Re-uploaded for the ear pink 14:31, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Ok.. There is pixel waste on the chest fur hole 14:33, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ._. 14:37, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Meep. There's a pixel  <--- on the leg and <--- on the tail. sorry...

☾ Sunstream  ❄ Watching the Snow Fall  14:46, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -_- 14:49, March 21, 2015 (UTC)

Omg she's so pretty 0.0 Maybe smoothen the neck shading? 03:35, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you 03:41, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Plumclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
Beep beep. I hate the shading -.- Comments? 00:58, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the side and hing leg shading a tad? Tiny itty bitty kitty. 'o' 15:44, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lol thanks. And which side are you asking me to define? I didn't want to define the wrong side. 12:53, March 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think defining all the shading would be better- I can't see it.

Willowshine (Alt. MCA 2) ~ For Approval
So I realized they use the same picture in Cats of the Clans, and she is listed as an apprentice, so here's the same version as the one I did before. It should be pretty exact as I have the file and everything. 02:48, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

I thought there's already one for her apprentice version. They're both pale gray tabbies, the only difference is the eye color. Anyways, maybe darken the shading a little? 03:53, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't think so, the other pale's are for the writing, these are after pictures. 04:00, March 22, 2015 (UTC)