Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 147

Star Flower (Star) ~ Approved
good afternoon.

 I never got to do an image of (one of) my favorite cat! This is amazing though... define the facial shading a bit more~?

Define the depth of the shading on the paws? This looks nice! o.o ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:53, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

the chest and paws should be white, and even if they are, they look too tinted. 11:20, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks guys <3 The chest and paws are white, I tried to add highlights and erase some of the shading.

could you define the tail shading a tad bit? 02:32 Wed Dec 2

Re-uploaded Yes.

This is gorgeous! :D Darken the shading a little just along the edge of the belly? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:50, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you

I dislike Star Flower but you did great justice to her. Comments before approval? 02:58, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Hate to break the CBA, but could you define the nosepink a little more? —   Fla      me    I can and I will  22:38, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ...

Re-CBA? 15:15, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Approved

Slate (Star) ~ Approved
I love this girl. In case you're wondering, I didn't add the scar as I felt you wouldn't be able to see it from this angle. If someone disagrees, though, I'll add it. 17:04, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry but honestly this cite for her being in starclan is invalid, as kate only says "i think they would be pretty chill in starclan" that does not confirm anything whatsoever that slate is in starclan at the current commented moment. Nor is "think" something that means "yes". 18:05, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't that mean that Slash and friends/One Eye don't get DF images? Because all she said was "yes, those cats would make fabulous Dark Forest cats!", not that they are in the DF. Also, the "yes" was in reply to a "Do you think" comment, not a "Are they in the DF?". 21:20 Fri Nov 27

Well, given that the "yes" was to the Dark Forest comment, not to Slate, I think it applies. The comment towards Slate said that they'd get along in StarClan, not that Slate died or anything...

Yeah, but the Dark Forest comment was "do you think these cats are in the DF", not "are these cats in the DF". Not that any of that applies to Slate's image. I just feel like the DF "yes" is kinda invalid, considering how the question is phrased. But I am rather new to the wiki and do not know everything that is considered a valid cite, so just ignore this comment if I'm wrong. 21:29 Fri Nov 27

Uh but it's Kate's answer that is valid, not my question, judging by that, a ton of cites are going to be nullified? And she flat out said "yes" in regards to my question. 02:11, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

But the question was "do you think" and thus yes meant "yes, I think so". I dunno, that's how I interpret it. 3:17 Sat Nov 28

can you bring this stuff to pc, it doesn't belong here. 05:18, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

If this does stay up, could you define the light on both ears? The pink is very hard to see. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 05:36, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:02, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading on the main part of the body.

Reuploaded. 18:26, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a little? This is really pretty! 20:26 Tue Dec 1

Reuploaded. Thank you. 20:35, December 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry to directly contradict the last suggestion you were given, but I honestly can't make out the shading very well (it doesn't help that the base color is already so dark), can you darken/define it a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:56, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:06, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the lighting around the muzzle a bit, it seems a little to dark. —   Fla      me    I can and I will  22:37, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:12, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blend the texture a bit more? I think the lines are too bold against the grey. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  12:06, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:00, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

I love Slate too. Comments before approval? 02:35, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Approved

Snake (ES) - Approved
I present one Clear Sky fanboy, at your service. This was actually fairly difficult, as the pale parts are almost entirely in shading.

Expand and define the shading. 20:44, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried. This is quite an annoying pattern to shade due to the locations of the pale parts, so I can't do more than this.

Comments before approval? 02:35, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Approved

Juniper Branch (Q) ~ Approved
09:24, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

How does one even charart. Can you define the shading on the tail? This is gorgeous skt! 13:24, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

reuploded 17:37, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

The patches seem to be visibly smudged on her other images. Please do so on this one. 10:36, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

they are smudged??? I'm only copyiing the rogue since it came first, aside from matching the pelt on the early settler. 12:41, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps smudge them a bit more? 12:44, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think its fine. They are smudged and imo seem to match fine 12:58, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

tbh they seem to be smudged more on both images.

reuploaded i smudged the black but I'm not smudging the cream, it'll ruin them otherwise. 18:07, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 02:36, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Approved