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The Apprentice's Quest/Chapter 6 ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? Song  heart  20:29, August 23, 2016 (UTC)


 * Is there a quote you can add?
 * 'He' sounds slightly redundant at the end of the last paragraph.

Added quote and fixed paragraph. Song  heart  20:44, August 23, 2016 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but the chapter is from pages 77-89 and the quote is from page 70. Was that a typo or is the quote not from the right chapter? Also put quote marks around the quote

Fixed. Song   heart  01:47, August 25, 2016 (UTC)

Would Leafpool be classified as a major character or can we bump her down to minor? 06:05, August 25, 2016 (UTC)

I personally think Leafpool should stay a major character as she took Alderpaw to Twolegplace and introduced him to StarClan. Song  heart  01:12, August 27, 2016 (UTC)

I think you're right. Comments before vote? 01:29, August 27, 2016 (UTC)

A Dangerous Path/Chapter 5 - Silver Nomination
01:20, August 27, 2016 (UTC)
 * In the 3rd paragraph, maybe link 'carrionplace disease' or just 'disease' as Diseases_and_Injuries, since that is the specific disease that the SC cats had?
 * In the 4th pagraph, "Runningnose explains that the reason why he believes this is beyond the omen mentioned by Tigerstar at the Gathering. It is because ShadowClan's previous leader, Nightstar, had not been accepted by StarClan and had not received his nine lives, which is why he died so quickly from the rat sickness." I think there is a grammar error in the first sentnce, since it says "Runningnose explains that the reason why..." but it explains why in the next sentence.
 * In the last paragraph, maybe link 'territory' as The_Forest_Territories instead, since it is talking about specifically windclan's territory? 19:19 Wed Aug 31

Updated. 20:25, August 31, 2016 (UTC)

Outcast/Chapter 20 ~ Silver Nomination
19:09 Sat Aug 27

Check quote for grammar and merge the last sentence in the first paragraph. In the sixth paragraph, add an "s" onto the last word. For the last paragraph, expand a little more for the last sentence. Song  heart  17:58, September 2, 2016 (UTC)

Outcast/Chapter 24 ~ Silver Nomination
16:55 Tue Aug 30

Moonrise/Epilogue ~ Silver Nomination
19:49 Wed Aug 31

Midnight (Book)/Chapter 3 ~ Silver Nomination
-- 18:44, September 1, 2016 (UTC)


 * Add a quote
 * Remove stub tag
 * Maybe link 'Mouse bile' in the first paragraph and capitalize "Gathering" in the last paragraph
 * 'Leafpaw' is redundant in the 2nd and third paragraph -- perhaps replace a few with "the tabby apprentice" or something similar.
 * In paragraphs 4,5, and 6, Leopardstar sounds redundant in spots so maybe tweak that. Blackstar is a bit redundant too.
 * In paragraph 5, greenleaf is "Green-leaf", perhaps fix this?
 * In the second to last paragraph, Leafpaw sounds redundant again.
 * Perhaps combine the last two sentences of the 8th paragraph, as they are very short and choppy on their own.

Improved --  19:55, September 2, 2016 (UTC)