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Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. 21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink 01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray 16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Theres waste by the butt 13:45, 5/09/2017

Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--  22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one

Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall 23:50, 5/09/2017

Reups --  20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images.

Reups --  02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place 02:43, 5/11/2017

Is there chest shading? If not, add some. 02:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define flank shading? Nice. :3 03:22, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  04:02, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The placement of the gray doesn't match completely. Especially check the warrior image, as you can see the difference between the shades better there, and also how there's a more defined patch of gray on the face.

Define the shading more 01:29, 5/12/2017

Reups --  02:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Ok I think the gray should match the elder's image since it was lightened/tweaked before the others and if that's the case then this is too dark, also the gray looks softer than the other images, and it's still kinda hard to tell what's gray and what's shading on the chest and front legs

Well, I was just asked to match the warrior image so I'm not sure what to do when critiques contradict each other :/ --  16:05, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The critiques, at least the recent one where I said to match the warrior image, don't contradict. I was talking about the gray placement, such as on the muzzle (which from what I can see, still hasn't been done). Snow is talking about the coloring, which is a separate issue, and also the coloring in other spots not previously mentioned.

There's a stray white pixel on the <--- paw. 21:08, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more 21:31, 5/15/2017

The shading on --> side of the head looks a little dark, maybe lighten and smooth it a little? 13:15, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like defining isn't the right word for this, but expanding is. I've noticed that the artist repeatedly "defined" the shading on the same spots when they should've expand it instead. That's why the shading looks pretty dark and not visible in some areas. It should be expanded on the tail and stomach.

Reups --  21:04, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 21:06, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's a few pixels of grey in the area behind the <- front leg. I think you could smooth that out a little or get rid of it. I can put a red circle on it if you'd like. Branchwing (talk) 01:05, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs, chest, and belly area and lighten the shading everywhere else 04:16, 5/18/2017

I think it looks too dark compared to the other images, but forgive me if it's just my screen or something.

Reups --  20:34, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

There's some hard-edged shading on the arm, see here http://vvcap.com/5NI5dU5r7SI 21:07, 5/19/2017

Reups --  14:44, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

The shading still appears to be leaking by the <--- arm. 15:48, 5/20/2017

Reups --  00:09, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten tail shading on the patch of shading the --> side near above the chest. Also, the --> left paw looks as though it has dapples on it, is it supposed to be like that? Sorry if the last part was rude. :P 02:35, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

No one ever corrected me so I think I'm right that the gray should match the elder image, which is significantly lighter than this

On the ---> ear, near the tip, it looks like there's a lighter spot on it, try to fix that so it matches the rest of the earpink. 13:33, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

elder was tweaked for pale grey first, so yeah match that one 15:28, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:46, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The grey on the tail looks dark compared to the rest of the images. It might be just the shading, but it still looks dark. So, could you possibly lighten the color there or just lighten the shading in that area? Branchwing (talk) 00:21, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back, and perhaps smudge/or add some closer to the lineart? I looks like there's hardly any there and maybe smooth the shading, just a little on <--- shoulder. 13:33, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face a little, and shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart on the back a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:31, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  18:13, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

The flank shading seems too blotchy. 18:49, 5/28/2017

Reups--  21:32, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Tail shading could be defined, smooth shading on---> paw, fix the leaking shading on the same paw, smooth facial shading and define it on the --> ear better, define shading depth on the flank also. 21:54, 5/28/2017

Reups --  22:32, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

The shading looks a little too dark on her tail tip, so lighten it a tiny bit, and smooth out the shading on her flank near the base of her tail and maybe a little around her tail tip. Define the light on the muzzle. 13:48, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  13:50, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking out on the < side of the < elbow, and also define the light on the tail tip

Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more 18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please <span style="">01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs <span style="">21:32, 5/15/2017

Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">00:56, 5/17/2017

Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

What means tad? – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

tad means a little bit.

Do I have to do something with legs? – 07:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

All you have to do is smooth the shading more over the whole image, and define the speckles a little bit in the shading <span style="">13:55, 5/18/2017

Reupload – 08:56, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin out the shading on her stomach a little? After that I think it'll be good to go. If I wasn't very specific, you can just say that. Basically what I meant is like the shading up from the haunch. 20:20, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken the speckles even more? Also if you're American you might be forgiven for not knowing tad, it's chiefly british --

I am russian ::::\ – 13:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

I noticed no one ever answered your question about shading depth and I still think it could be defined so here's an image of one of the apprentice tutorials, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:BCPrincess73.tutorial.png, which mentions shading depth so I hope that helps you

Reupload Would you like some vanilla ice cream with chocolate chips? – 10:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

It looks white, and less creamy white <span style="">19:39, 5/22/2017

Smooth out the body shading

Reupload – 08:21, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The shading could be smoothed more. 13:30, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

i dunno XXXX| – 15:45, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible or define it a bit more? It's hard to see it on my screen. Unless others see it just fine on their screens. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:37, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

I do think it wouldn't hurt to smooth just the neck shading. 20:17, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Are you really sure? – 06:55, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

well people dont generally just say things for the sake of it so yeah they're sure lol. anyway to fix the problem just ligten it by like 10% or smth then gaussian blur if ur lazy and patch up the leaking areas. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:13, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload What means "patch up the leaking areas" – 15:49, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the earpink a little not more? I'm still having trouble visualizing it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 18:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the neck shading again and also smooth out the tail-tip shading? And also, to answer, patching up leaking areas is referring to the shading-away-from-the-lineart leakage that sometimes happen when gaussian blurring, so yeah.^^

Smooth out the shading on the hips and shoulder/chest a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:32, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 13:42, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink more? 15:26, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit, it looks kinda dark to me. -- <span style="border-radius:1em;background-image:-webkit-linear-gradient(left,#d278d2,#7070ff);font-size:20px;"> Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  04:28,5/28/2017

After you define the earpink, smudge it a bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 00:11, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

I am still working – 15:56, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload

Smooth out the shading on the tail tip and the neck area

to save you some time from other ppl commenting tbh just smooth out all of the shading in general   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 11:49, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Still

Reupload – 11:12, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink

You've been asked to define the ear pink multiple times and to save you some trouble of getting asked even more, just darken it a few shades.

Daisytoe (A) ~ For Approval
Disneytoe's my last image before I become a warrior! Go go go! --

Good job Neon! Maybe define the eye depth, unless there is some already. Cosmokitten (talk) 10:18, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Decided that even though there was depth that it needed some definition. Fixed. --

Define the shading a bit? I like this, good job! Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:55, May 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smooth/smudge the shading on the top of the hindleg closest to us and the base of the tail. 13:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit, it looks flat. 19:35, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like all the shading could be smoothed out tbh <span style="">19:48, 5/19/2017

I believe the mickey mouse head on the chest is facing the wrong way. On the warrior and kit image, the head is facing sideways. This has it facing right side up. The patch on the back should be further up the back near the shoulders and the ears on the mickey head on the haunch need to be smaller. There should also be a tiny patch of gray on the furthest back paw. And I feel like all of the gray could be a tiny bit softer. 20:07, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Define shading depth more. 00:12, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

How's this? It turned out I errored when re-uploading, so my first re-upload was the same image as the first. --

Maybe desaturate the purple? I had the same problem, don't worry, but it seems too light/colorful. Maybe darken in a few ticks? And smooth it out? <span style="">15:47, 5/20/2017

Re-ups --

The shading could be smoothed out on the belly, and > half of the cat overall

Define the shading, the shading depth, define the eye depth, smooth the ear pink. 14:46, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail. <span style="">19:37, 5/22/2017

Still working?

Re-ups sure i am --

I don't think it reuploaded correctly - It looks like the same image as the one before. 09:37, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

On the mickey mouse head on the haunch, the ears need to be smaller in comparison to the "head" circle. 15:24, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the upper back, it all looks a bit hard-edged. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:39, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Smooth the shading a little bit more. 02:46, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth

Re-ups tfw you're ready to re-up but then you see "define depth" --

Define the shading a little? 13:07, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

The tail shading is leaking I'm pretty sure, and the shading all over the image could be defined a bit more. The shading depth too <span style="">09:46, 6/02/2017

Re-ups *takes bite of snackoo* I feel like it's lighter on a PNG than it looks like on GIMP. Can you redline it, Broken?

Smooth shading and define shading depth

Re-ups no srsly broken get me your redline --

Smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us. 23:35, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

sharpen the mickeys a little - they seem more blurred/ less defined in shape than the other images

Dust Muzzle (W) - For Approval
It's been too long since I've done one of these. But now I'm finally free from school taking up my time. :P I'm pretty sure I got the pattern right. Thoughts? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 22:17, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a little? It's kind of dark. --

Define shading on tail a little

Is it me or is it just the shading, but the tail seems to be a different color grey than the main body. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:38, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

I think that's a mixture of shading and highlights. Jayie's shading always has tons of stuff that goes with it, including probably multiple layers of fun things. lol I love Jayie's shading so much.

Still working?

Reuploaded. The tail looks different because the shadow is on the stripes on the main part of the body, making them look darker, and the highlights are on the main fur color, making it look lighter. On the tail, the shading is reversed because of how the light is positioned, resulting in the main color looking darker and the stripe color looking lighter. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 18:29, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

I hope this doesn't sound rude, but why is the shading on the body black, but it's not nearly as dark on the tail?

Smoothen out the shading that comes down from the back and right onto the front leg closest to us...so, I guess the shoulder arch thing? I hope you understand. 20:18, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Reuploaded. Not sure why I didn't get email notifications for this. And I explained the reason why the shading on the tail looks differnt above. Jayie Just yo u wait~

I think what you explained above was about the color underneath the shading but I'm asking about the color of the shading itself. The shading on the tail seems much less dark than the shading on the body I'm sorry I'm not trying to be difficult I just don't think you understood my question  so maybe just define the shading on the tail a little bit?

Reuploaded. The shading is the same color on the whole image. I didn't use black shading at all. It's the same level of darkness as on the body. It looks lighter because the shading on the tail is over a lighter color (the light underside of the tail) while the shading on the back is over the darker color (the stripes). Here's the image without shading: http://www.ezimba.com/work/170606C/ezimba18082948671200.png and here's the shading (it's three layers of light purple on multiply, but I put them as normal here so you could see the colors) http://www.ezimba.com/work/170606C/ezimba18082946177300.png Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 03:12, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Blossom (W) - For Approval
I don't like how this turned out tbh. 20:00, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ginger-y patches this should have - they're supposed to be the color #c95a1e (a medium ginger), but I can't really them on here

It looks like there's something leaking on the rump right next to the tail line art 20:26, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:54, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the body, tail, and front leg closest to us. 22:12, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

You want the file? it'd be extremely helpful and i don't think this honestly matches that well...

Sure Fox, but what format would it be in? I use gimp. 22:56, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's mainly the pattern that's the issue. I'll fix the pattern once I get the file from Fox. 23:18, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

smooth out the neck shading.

Reuploaded I don't think there's much of a difference. 09:59, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible and smooth it out some more? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 13:01, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now it looks worse??? 17:06, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

if you're using GIMP, tick the hard edged option on the smudge tool, and try and smudge the white from there.

Also the ginger on her other images doesn't appear to be that bright

Reuploaded Well, it's getting better. 23:53, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

yep, looking good. i would smooth out the shading everywhere and smooth out the white a little

Reuploaded I feel like I smoothed the white out too much. (Although, smudging it instead of blurring it to smooth it out would be a better idea...) 01:45, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

The patches look more ,, roughly?? smudged on her other images

Reuploaded How's this??? 22:43, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

try and go for a softer look on the white and not show any of the smudge marks

Reuploaded I feel like I'm doing something wrong. 19:02, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Doesn't this have to match the rogue image? This looks like it's matching the es and that's a different pose than the warrior blank 20:08, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded reuploaded it then i realized i was on a different account... so oops 21:47, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
She's back you guys. (Snowdapple said I could post this after it was archived so here ya go)

Near the tail diagonal almost from the very back patch, the shading's a little blotchy. 00:21, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading

smooth the shading.

re-up Why won't you smooth out????

There's a little bit of leaking shading where the body meets the tail. 01:22, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

you think you could remove some of the white dots in the pupil? it makes it hard to see

re-up There's no leaking shading, it's probably just the texture.

No, look at the area I circled in red. The patch of shading I was trying to point out to you doesn't touch the lineart at all and also looks kind of hard edged. If it's texture, you should probably smooth it out there or whatnot because the shading really does appear to be leaking. 20:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Eh, not too happy.

its not like ivy's suggestion damaged ur image lol. just had to point that out. Life actually sucks 24/7  so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:50, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the brown patch on the > front leg could be a little bigger, as it seems to cover more length on the apprentice

re-up Redid the texture because I didn't like it.

Beautiful! Maybe define the texture just a tiny bit? Good job! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:57, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you add a tiny bit of shading on <- ear?

Sweetbriar (W) - For Approval
<span style="">16:26 Wed May 31

These stripes are a bit too sharp. I know you probably did it the same way on the kit, and the StarClan is the same way, but this really should be smudged a fair bit more.

Reuploaded Also made the muzzle shading look less like a stripe. <span style="">23:56 Wed May 31

Define the shading depth on the main body

Smoothen out the white chest. 22:23, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

tbh i think the chest is fine cuz its the same style as her other images   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 11:41, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

I know you're the OA of the kit, but are you sure the white should cover the entire chest like that? It seems like it only covers a little bit of the chest on the kit, queen and star. Also, I agree the white could be softened just a bit <span style="">23:40, 6/03/2017

Still working?

Hawkfoot (Alt. Star) ~ For Approval
Comments? 03:18, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Minor, but could you make the <--- eye darker blue to match better? It looks like two different coloured eyes atm. 03:21, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? 03:26, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit? Not sure if desktop screen or not, but it seems pretty dark.

On my screen it looks about right? I think a well-suited darkness. But it depends on whatever other people think, and it could go either way. 04:19, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

imo it could be lightened, but then again my screen is dark af

and mine's the exact opposite (max brightness yo), and I'm seeing extremely dark shading, hence why I commented.

I think the shading is fine, but if anything, you could lighten it just a little bit. Anyways, define eye depth a little. 13:21, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eye depth is ticky to do on this blank, using the method I do, so I changed the color to see if that helped. Also, I'd rather not lighten the shading, as I'm already having trouble seeing it, and my screen also makes things seem lighter that they are. I think the problem is that the base is quite dark, so I had to use an even darker color for the shading. 18:00, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

There is some eye colour leaking on the eye farthest from us.ErmineGlow (talk) 18:12, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

He looks red-brown. 18:49, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

shouldn't the eye colour be orange? she has no eye colouring errors. 19:15, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There is no eye color leaking; trust me, I check. Colorpick from Spikefur again, since that seems to be the only dark brown I can do that's not too red. As for the eyes, I'm going to keep them for now, as I was told, when doing Moonflower's alt warrior that it was fine. 19:34, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

It is representing an incorrect description, so I think the eyes are  fine. As for the brown, it still looks really red, so maybe colorpick from Tigerstar or Bramblestar? That should look good <span style="">19:41, 6/01/2017

It might just be my screen, but it doesn't look red-brown at all??

there's a confirmed eye colour and no eye error, and it's not allowed on other alts so why should it be on this? :/ moonflower has eye colour errors. she doesnt. 19:44, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

^^^ The eyes should be her normal eye color

Reuploaded. Just curious, would I need to tweak Brackenfur's 5th alt warrior? It has blue eyes, which he is never described with. As for the base, I colorpicked directly from his file, so if this is too red, then all of Spikefur, Squirrelwhisker, and Deerfoot's images would have to be tweaked, as I used the same color of brown for each of them. 19:59, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

i would say so for brackenfur yea. 19:23, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

The eyes look like different colors. It's probably just where the light source is and how you do eyes, but it still bothers me a little bit. 13:37, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is about as good as it's going to get. 19:07, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the ear shading a tad <span style="">06:46, 6/05/2017

Reuploaded. 17:04, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Fallowtail (Star) ~ For Approval
04:48, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Looks like the shading near the tail is leaking or something? Looks weird, idk how to describe it. <span style="">05:13, 6/01/2017

I think Broken is referring to the tail shading that looks like is leaking onto the flank near the tip of the tail. 06:37, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah I am^ <span style="">19:38, 6/01/2017

Perhaps that was done intentionally to show the tail's shadow on the flank? Idk. Regardless, I think the shading by the tail tip should be swapped to left side, since the light appears to be coming from the right side based on all the other parts of the image. 19:43, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:21, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink? 23:28, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reup 02:18, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Are the eyes supposed to be different colors Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:56, June 3, 2017 (UTC)chat

...they aren't? The <--- eye just has so little room to show depth, but it has the same colours as the other eye. Should I somehow alter it? 19:08, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth a little bit more in the eyes? <span style="">23:36, 6/03/2017

Reuploaded I tried. 03:53, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the flank texture flow better with the shape. It seems too straight across imo. <span style="">06:43, 6/05/2017

Reup 14:06, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Milkfur (RC) (MCA) ~ For Approval
I'm tired of mulling over this so here I am throwing this out to for the world to see. First attempt with smudged shading. 06:29, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be texture on the gray or am I just really blind? <span style="">19:37, 6/01/2017

I also think the stripes might be a little more smudged on the other images. 19:40, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's supposed to be texture on the stripes too. 20:04, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups 18:05, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Darkened the stripes 02:00, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define face shading?

Reups 23:18, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Hazel Burrow (App) ~ For Approval
I'm really proud of this, but the shading seems off.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:07, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

so like you dont have to do this, but this is just a solution as to fix why it might look "off" to you: in most light sources the shading probably covers more surface area and has more curvature to the flow of the body compared to how it does on this image (it just follows the linear art), it looks awkward because the shading makes the image look like its 20 flat pieces of paper shaped like the cat layered on top of each other as opposed to being a 3d cat irl. TLDR so the solution i propose is to probably expand the shading just by like 3 pixels or something like that especially on the stomach and haunches.   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:47, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

ok so i think the above post sounded slightly offensive n i apologize fren, i was just trying to be constructive as possible   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 11:47, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

It's okay, I guess. I'm gonna redo the shading anyways. I was just trying out something different. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 12:32, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading looks a lot better now! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:58, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups. Smoothed out shading on paws. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 20:46, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups again. Fixed some leg shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 23:31, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe you could ask for the kit file, because the black seems way too dark and I can't really see the shading. <span style="">06:41, 6/05/2017

ok so torches down but tbh i think the colors match p well... and i do see the shading idk feel free to disagree. also BEAUTIFUL shading holy crap   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 10:34, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does this look better? I do have the file, it still looks dark, but it's the correct colors. And thanks. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 16:07, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. All right, should be good now! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:17, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Mintfur (RC) (Ro) - CBA
I'm just going to go ahead and post this, I know it looks pretty bad... 22:41, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

This is great! Well, at last to my untrained eye. ANyways, could you define the shading on the front legs a tad? ErmineGlow (talk) 23:20, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Gonna get yelled at, but I can see the shading on the front legs just fine. It's defined good enough in my eyes. Any darker, and Ivybreeze would be told to lighten it. <span style="">23:34, 6/03/2017

Maybe you can add about 2-3 more stripes on the flank? This is good! 23:36, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:13, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes look more broken up on his other image

Smooth the shading on the flank a little bit? 02:33, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:19, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Doestar (K) ~ For Approval
someone send help this is so bad i wanna puke

Define the shading and ear pink

Re-uploaded i expanded the ear pink bc i can't change the color

Deerpaw (TC) (K) ~ For Approval
kitty. This matches the apprentice, and I also think the only place the white speckles would show is the belly, since the rest are on the back/top of the haunch and such on the other images

Gonna get shot for this, but I think the white would be visible on the sides. Why would it only be visible on the stomach without seeing the flanks? The apprentice's white dots are visible on the stomach and sides, so I think it would be visible from this angle too. <span style="">21:51, 6/05/2017

Agreed ^^ Smooth out the shading on the <--- leg?

I agree with Broken. Smooth out the shading on the tail a little bit. 23:32, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded No, the white doesn't show on both sides of this blank. < side of the cat only shows the chest and that goes into the leg - and the chest clearly doesn't have spots on the apprentice, as it's not specified in the description. I added a few speckles on the very far > side, but this blank really doesn't have a haunch, persay, and the specific way I chose to put the apprentice's spots on the belly and sides (which in essence, I only made them stretch to the top of the back from the belly, and arch over the haunch), I can't put them where you're suggesting because it'd be a contradiction to the placement of the apprentice. They don't go onto anywhere but the top of the haunch, along the back, and because this is such a small blank, it doesn't have that.

Mouse Ear (W) ~ For Approval
mirror mirror on the wall who has the smallest ears of them all 22:36, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smallear does. Maybe smooth out the shading on the belly a little bit and/or the tail? May just be my screen lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 22:55, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit. 23:39, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Comments? 17:09, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and blur the stripes a little more. They look softer on his other images. 17:48, June 6, 2017 (UTC)