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Snowflake (Ki) ~ CBA
Best attempt at texture. ^^ 03:06, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to this ==> leg. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading and blur the neck shading a little. 22:45, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste above the <== ear, and blur the shading a bit. 19:52 Thu Jan 22

There's no waste, actually o_O my phone was showing something completely different 22:38 Thu Jan 22

Define the shading, please. i literally can't see any.-- 21:37, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink on the <== ear a little more. 02:48 Sun Jan 25

Re-upped 15:39, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. The back paw tells me it's coming from <== here and the rest ==> there. Also, add more shading to ==> leg. She/he looks good! ^^ ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 01:44, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding some more depth to the shading, especially near the haunch area. 19:39, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit more, please.-- 02:04, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:59, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

I spy some waste by that left paw, and the space between the chest fluff and the tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:22, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 03:55, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:32, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

i still feel the neck shading needs more blurring. 13:50, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

I agree^^ and please define the light on the two front legs. 14:04, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

I literally can't blur it anymore  19:46, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

if your going with this lightsource could you expand the light on the chest some?? 16:28, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some depth to the shading, please? 19:56, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 22:40, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

The light source on the tail and back foot conflicts with the body. Think you could move the tail shading to the base of the tail and the shading on the back foot to the top of his foot? And then I'll CBA it, unless someone else has a comment. ^_^ 00:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading on his/her right foot can be blurred a little. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 00:22, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? As promised. 16:42, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (Ki) ~ For Approval
itty bitty kitty 21:47 Thu Feb 5

Define shading everywhere. Can't see any. Also, smoothen the stripes. 23:52, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, and Darken the stripes please. 23:54, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think thickening the stripes will do, tbh. Define the texture too. This is lovely :) ~ Burntclaw  Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:15, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't any texture, just how the stripes are smudged. <span style="">00:38 Fri Feb 6

re-upped <span style="">00:43 Fri Feb 6

Regardless of the texture stuff, could you define it? Also, lighten up the shading. Remember, defining isn't always darkening, it's making it more visible. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:06, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Also, thicken the stripes a tad more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:08, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups how do i define the texture if there isn't any? like there literally isn't any texture on the image how do i define what does not exist (sorry if i'm rude it's 6:30 in the morning and i have a cold) <span style="">12:31 Fri Feb 6

I know it's not texture, but could you define the fur thingy (X.X)? While you're at it, can you shrink down her pale chest. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:34, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

boop a doop doop re-uploaded <span style="">12:46 Fri Feb 6

Smudge her pale chest fur into her darker fur some more. She's lookin' gorgeous ^.^ 10:57, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups i know she's so pretty <3 <span style="">14:58 Sat Feb 7

re-ups there was some waste on her nose from the chest <span style="">15:01 Sat Feb 7

Thin out the pale chest a little bit and define the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:42, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have a second opinion on the pale chest? It looks fine to me. i'll probably upload tomorrow, really bummed out because i lost the file of an image i spent a really long time on <span style="">19:17 Sun Feb 8

Yeah, the pale chest could be bigger a bit 16:24, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups also tried to do a version with jayie's shading which can be found here <span style="">23:16 Mon Feb 9

Blur the neck shading a tad and define the shading on this <--- front visible leg. 22:58, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups ladies and gentlemen we have tapped out at 8 layers of shading <span style="">23:09 Wed Feb 11

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
OK, I shouldnt be doing black cats on this laptop because the colors are all screwed up and I have to squint to see the shading. But here. 20:01, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her maybe and dull down the Ear Pink. She looks grey on my screen. (correct me if I am wrong about the earpink)  20:14, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a blacked out nose? <span style="">03:09 Tue Feb 10

Actually, I think I asked Breezey about this once, and black cats don't need to have black noses. I think they can have a darker reddish nose, or something along those lines.

Mind darkening him a tad? He seems pretty light. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 10:45, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Brambleshade already said that, Burntclaw^^ Also, may you define the tail shading? 15:55, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Dew Nose 19:46, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over :P 22:13, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Updated 23:12, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice job! 23:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna bring attention to the fact that it's got the wrong file name; could an admin fix that for Bramble? 00:07, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe I could fix it. 00:09, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There we go. I really like her :3 00:11, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mind lightening up the ear pink a little? Gorgeous, Bramble :$ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I think she is one fine kitty <3 Any better? 00:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the legs, and define the light on the legs. <span style="">12:57 Wed Feb 11

Coal (NP) (Ro) - Withdrawn
Yes, I know he needs something done with his fur because of the whole tattered thing. I'll work on that later as I don't have the time right now. Do not comment telling me to add it- I am already fully aware.

his fur isnt tattered jk  but really can you define the shading everywhere but his body. 08:02, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing because Eagle Feather.

Stone Song (P3) Ancient ~ For Approval
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 06:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look unsmudged/blurred compared to his other images. Mind blurring them/smudging them some? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:15, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded also added foot stripes i forgot 09:54, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Mind define the shading on the back? He's gorgeous!^^  00:16, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't shading on the back. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:50, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

But, shouldn't there be? 01:19, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

nope no back shading, the source doesn't call for it. 01:22, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:28, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it just fine. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 13:04, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Is it my eyes, or is his base slightly lighter on his sharpclaw image?

Looks about the same to me^^ 20:31, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I colour picked off the sharpclaw theres probably just more lighter blue than darker blue i there 00:39, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Fish Leap (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Gahh, it's been ages since Hawky did charart. <span style="">17:39 Tue Feb 10

Define the light on the tail? he's a pretty kitty <span style="">22:47 Tue Feb 10

Re-uploaded. Thank you. c: <span style="">1:39 Wed Feb 11

I still think it could be defined a tad. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's rather difficult to define the light in this case: I have the dark side facing the light and the light side in shadow. If you want me to lighten it up more, it won't be the dark brown it needs to be. <span style="">0:30 Thu Feb 12

???? His Softpaw's tail is only striped, does it have a lighter base color on it? ._. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:44, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Storm Pelt (ki) ~ For Approval
I hate his dad but his mom is nice I guess 19:26, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Would he need a bushy tail or..? 22:28, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think so. He wasn't named for the tail, so as far as I know that just means longhair blank. If we gave lineart tweaks to every cat described with a bushy or plumy tail, like half the cats would have lineart tweaks. 00:03, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the mottleS? I can't see them 05:57, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the tail shading more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:29, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 00:05, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:28, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Jagged Lightning (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I like his name. Comments? 21:56, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

The sharpclaw isn't smudged as much on the white as this one- mind dulling it down a bit?

Re-uploaded. 03:06, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt D) - For Approval
Yay, my first deputy. And it's of my favorite cat outside of ThunderClan. :D Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:26, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste near her tail and front paws. Also waste between the square thingy where the tail is. Can you brighten up the Earpink? forgot to mention, I don't see much shading, could you define it? (Pretty good for your first deputy!) 22:32, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Conflict in commenting so just want to say really fast that I didn't remove my comment. This is beautiful! =) Would you define mainly the leg and tail shading, I can see the body and neck shading just fine^^, and I think the earpink can be defined, not really so to speak "lightened" as it is already a pretty light color. Lovely job, I must say this is one of your best chararts yet, no lie! 22:37, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

i literally can't see the earpink at all. Darken the shading just a tad, this is really pretty. <span style="">22:43 Tue Feb 10

OMG its so much better than mine XD Would you mind defining the light on the rump, as it looks a liiitttlllle flat. This is gorgeous! <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:10, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Thaaaaat would be because I totally forgot to include the earpink. XD Reuploaded, earpink has been added, shading darkened, and waste erased. Also darkened the shading on the hip. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:43, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Darkened shading a bit more. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:32, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you expand the leg shading on the legs? This is gorgeous ^^ And just to ask, where is your light source? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:26, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shading has been expanded, and I messed with the eyes a bit. The light source is coming from behind Mistyfoot. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:34, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

In that case, mind adding some light to the tail? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:40, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:39, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes look purple on my screen. Aren't they supposed to be blue? 14:12, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

They look blue to me. In fact, I quite like that shade of blue- it's pretty and suits her quite well.

Dew Nose (Ki) ~ For Approval
Yay, kits. Is this splotchy enough? 23:59, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I just have this strange feeling the face needs more shading... Correct me if I am wrong   00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 00:37, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, the white-tipped nose and tail don't seem to stand out. Could you brighten the white on that nose white and maybe spread it a bit, and spread out and brighten the white tail-tip? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:57, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

reups 16:39, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you expand that white tip more, past that first stripe perhaps? Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:55, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I was hoping to keep the white on the tail small, and the first stripe visible V_V 22:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

You think you could define the shading a little tad? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:26, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

reups 01:21, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Ancient) ~ For Approval
No. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:43, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Wouldn't she need nose pink? 13:51, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Ooh, this looks nice. Could you smooth out the shading, and define it on the tail? 16:39, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lol honestly I think she forgot the nosepink^^ Define your lightsource, too. These <--- legs over here are telling me two different sources, same with this ---> foot and the center of the body. She's pretty, nice job. =) 23:03, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think she would need nose pink, but I'm going to redo this shading because it looks so crappy. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:25, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Uh, the nose pink is kinda mandatory on these blanks o.O

Dove's Wing (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Kis szürke cica :3 20:58, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a little more. <span style="">21:48 Wed Feb 11

Bluestar (Alt L 5) ~ For Approval
I tried to add some texture, but it failed miserably so I just got rid of that. I've never done a leader before; comments? There's some waste under her hind-quarter, which I will remove on my next upload. 21:43, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking. (i think bluestar is cursed) <span style="">21:48 Wed Feb 11

Define the earpink a bit. Splendid job, Sorrel. =) 23:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)