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Voleclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
This was supposed to be here because Cloud is withdrawn. Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  00:18, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we weren't allowed to do that? Post a charart before the images are archived. I may be wrong, but I just thought one of the leads said that atsome point...... *shrugs* Anyways, fi it stays up, redden the earpink a bit and make it bigger. Looks great! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw! I edit conflicted with you 3 times over this. This will be declined and im tired of typing out why. 00:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Icy! XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But I was editing the same time as you, and Lakestream(?) is supposed to be approved. Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  00:32, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is over the limit until something is acutally archived. 00:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's exactly 35 images. I just archived Lakeshine. 00:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. But for future reference, please don't post until the conflicting image is archived. Voleclaw needs a gray nose. 00:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything. 00:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, sorry but there was only 34 when I uploaded but I guess Iceheart beat me to it. :) Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  01:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. 22:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure if changes are showing and @Pearls what do you mean 'Blur everything.' Why does the nose have to be gray? Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  22:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

@Wild Sorry, that was when i wasant thinking. I apologize. 22:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading under the chin and blur the highlight on the chest; it looks a bit blotchy, darken the shading on the right side. 03:04, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail and blur all the highlights. ` 23:23, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

i thought voleclaw was black oh well. Nice job but the shading is blotchy blur it some. 23:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The right earpink looks smaller than the other. Also blur the forehead shading. 00:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just letting you know, you need to work on this or it will be declined. 00:59, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivystripe, yes I know. @CinderxLion, Nope he's dark gray ;) Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  21:56, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  22:08, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

there's something in the highlight on his chest plz fix that. And i know he's dark gray now. 19:33, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ` 00:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  21:16, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 00:36, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

The midriff highlights looks messy. <font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  00:11, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going on Vacation for a couple weeks so if anyone wants to take this over they can. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:13, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wildfire, why not just withdraw it? 17:55, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Saying that anyone can take over this means the same thing as withdrawing, doesn't it? 23:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it is. That's what Wildfire was saying XD. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:46, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over....Please? 01:05, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Imma reupload in a few seconds. It's gonna be good! 01:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may take over, no need to ask, just announce it 01:20, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay the place where the light is coming is from the left. Comments? 01:12, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is way too bright. Dull it down, blur it, and also move it up in allignment with the center of the ear. 20:06, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I thought it was a little bit odd. But anyways comments? 22:28, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink darker, but not too dark. 11:31, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:30, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Just darken it the slightest little bit 23:03, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks like it's hanging out of the ear, in other words its too long. 14:02, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's what I thought. But changes aren't showing 23:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

dull the earpink a bit, it's too bright. and make the nose darker. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and done 00:13, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the chest highlight so it extends over to the right more, and blur it. <span style="">03:57 Thu Oct 6

Extend the tail shading all the way up the left side of the tail. Also, extend the chest shading to the left side of the lineart as well for a correct lightsource. -- 01:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still a little too large; shrink it a tad. 17:34, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Why does ear pink have to be so hard.... 18:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading and darken the shading under the chin. 01:25, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured. I like this. I don't belive that it can get better than this! 01:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink more? 14:58, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The under the chin shading still needs to be darkened, the chesthighlight still needs to be blurred, and add some highlight to the leg thats infront of all the others. 17:47, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

ReuploadedI can't blur the ear pink anymore and I really like it ^^ 01:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks lighter than the pelt. Can you darken it a tad? -- 14:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more triangular, and blur where the shading and the highlights meet. 01:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

As beautiful as this is, it needs to be declined, as it's over the month limit. You can repost this later, but right now it's just taking up space. <span style="">05:22 Tue Oct 11

No, Wildheart. Since Sandstorm only took over on the 29th of September, it doesn't matter when Wildfire started the image. She has one full month, like any other user does. 06:03, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 17:08, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. 17:24, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ack! Sorry Sandstorm! I just skimmed over this and didn't see the point at which you took over. I know you can't blur the earpink anymore, but it's still pretty blotchy. (If you need help blurring, I can blur it.) <span style="">23:54 Tue Oct 11

Onestar (A) ~ CBA
I can't help but say that this is a fail. First tabby, second image. I pulled the colors from his leader image. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:28, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Put some dapples in to match the warrior and deputy art. 04:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; I added Dapples. Wait for Changes to Show... <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is not a fail, it's awesome! Add more stripes to the haunch and define the tail stripes. 04:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Thanks... <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 04:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This looks nice! There's some waste around most of the charart - a thin line. You can see it if you tilt the screen a bit. erase that please. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Niceeee. x3 Define the shading. 13:52, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Changes aren't showing. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 14:58, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The color almost looks kind of off to me. 21:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the base brown is too dark. Try lightening it just a tad. Maybe it's just the shading...but I don't think so. 18:23, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know the white muzzle is on his other images, but he was never described with one so can you get rid of it? <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

If it is too dark, in GIMP (or maybe another thing) you can go to 'Color' and then 'Brightness-Contrast..' and you can lighten the whole image without some serious work. 01:09, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights and this is good! 12:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Again, highlights are optional =) Just define your light parts (where it's not shaded) 21:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not being on. I'll work on it now. <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 19:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. 23:38, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 22:27, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild  <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    22:45, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink maybe, and darken the colors on the tail or something so they match with the rest of the image. ;P 23:31, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the highlights into the pelt. I don't want to use blur because I think it's already been blurred a lot. Blur it if you can or smudge it. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  00:29, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

In all the updated versions, I cannot see the white muzzle removed. If you did, I am so sorry, but if not, make his muzzle brown, please. 01:19, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make is tail color resemble his pelt color. 20:46, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm going to be leaving the wiki due to a lot of work. If anyone wants to take this over, they can. :3 <font color="#00ccff">Starshine <font color="#00ccff" style="background:white;"> Waiting for Winter! 21:01, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Changing the heading. If someone wants this, they may have it.If not, I'll decline it later. 05:19, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. 17:53, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah lighten it a lot and also more highlights goood! 23:17, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thin the stripes a bit more, define them within the highlights, define the mottles, and define the ear-pink. 03:47, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid it to match the leader. 17:30, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 23:13, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:48, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I can not see the earpink. Make it darker and define it. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:52, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:07, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. Blurring it less might help. 14:04, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's fine now. 17:09, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink more, and this will be ready. 00:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful image, Moon. CBA? 19:29, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt CBA D: but I think you need to brighten the earpink; I can barely see it at all. I know, I know, this contradicts what was said before, but I really can't see it. At least define it. <span style="">04:22 Thu Oct 6

Reuploaded The first time ever someone interrupted my CBA. But I'm not offended xD. 18:01, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten it a tad more? <span style="">21:32 Mon Oct 10

Should this have a white muzzle? Or is that just because of age? xD And the ear pink looks odd, can you brighten it a bit? (weird because people were asking you to darken it xD) But just a bit, not a lot. :3 01:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 17:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @Scarletwind, if I redden it, it won't match the leader image. And I hate you, earpink. 01:59, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, join the party. It's not bad on other lineart, but the apprentices are a pain. It doesn't match his leader image yet - in fact, I still can't see it. 14:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took it from the leader image... again. T_T 17:34, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. 21:35, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) - For Approval
My gosh, it seems like such a long time since I posted a charart here. I know I've been a bit inactive recently, but I'm going to try and be more active from now on. And, I realise there is no ear pink, Pixlr was down when I tried to do it, so I'll do it on Sumopaint or something later. I just wanted to get the image up whilst there was a space. So, comments? Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 07:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have done earpink. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  09:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a lot. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the highlights more smooth. 15:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define your light-source, define the shading, then blur the high-lights and the shading. And take the ear-pink from Hollyleaf or Nightcloud. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She needs the scar across her eye too. 18:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. Mi st  y!  19:02, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She does not need a scar, as her scar is on her left eye. 02:18, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add earpink, and blur the highlights(hope Im lookin' at the right one) -- 02:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I was using the same eye as the kittypet XD 19:40, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink darker, it looks to bright right now. Take the earpink from Hollyleaf. 15:27, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Look up  to the past…  16:03, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Try to blur the ear pink a lot, and make the shoulder highlight just a tad bit bigger. :3 Mi  st  y!  20:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is blotchy...also make the highlights bigger. 23:36, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leopard  claw  Look up  to the past…  07:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look like big bits of wet paper. Blur. And also blur shading.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 08:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a line at the bottom of the earpink that sticks out. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 15:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Try and blend the highlights and shading a little better, Leopard. If you need help, just ask. =) 05:20, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink out by blurring it. 20:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Leopard?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 02:09, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

If you are, the highlights are really blotchy. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 23:15, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 03:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry, I am working on it. I've just been so busy with school lately I haven't had time. Sorry. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  12:53, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights and shading way more smoother. They look very stiff. Also, there's some blurred lineart by the front leg closest to us, and darken the shading as well. 19:28, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Just a friendly reminder, still working on this? 19:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yes, sorry, sorry. I redid the shading. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  07:36, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the highlights with the shading and pelt more. They're big defined pale gray discs.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 07:55, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink. 16:15, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Why is this a long haired blank with a short haired tail? 17:51, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

That is creepy. Any way, there is gray about above the shot haired tail and the foot. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  01:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink 07:30, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of some of this black stuff near the tail.. And define the ear pink. (sorry, my sig isn't working -_-) 01:08, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and center and blur the ear pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Birdpaw.apprentice.png, please.

Reuploaded Damn, I forgot to rename it. Ooops. I've blurred the highlights as much as I can, so if they need more blurring, can somebody please help me. Thanks. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  17:04, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can help if you want. 19:44, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Skyheart (A) - For approval
Yep, here's Skyheart at her apprentice age. I'll blur the stripes more if I need to. 12:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I forgot tehear pink, so I added it. Changesaren't showing yet.

Very nice. Hm, lighten and blur the earpink a little. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 12:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

First of all, the heading should be Skyheart (A) - For Approval. Second of all, blur the stripes a lot x3 13:49, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add another stripe right where the haunch starts. This is great! 15:18, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the heading for you :) Blur the earpink as well, and define the shading. 15:33, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more light stripes, nice work! Leaf-storm,16:39,September 18,2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around the charart 21:22, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink -- 02:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add smaller stripes <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  08:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it when I get home from school.

Darken the shading a bit. 23:18, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it on Saturday. School, y u keep me busy? Dx

Blur the stripes. 23:30, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink.And theres waste around the image -- 01:25, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Added a few light stripes like Leafstorm suggested. I blurred the stripes a lot, defined the shading more, and instead of lightening the ear-pink I made it more pink than brownish-red. Changes should be showing.

Sharpen the edges of the stripes a bit. Looks better :3 <span style="background:#EAFAE8; color: #3DD5FF; font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;">07:11 Sep 25 Sun

Add some stripes to the back legs. Lookin' good ;3 12:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes on the back leg. I didn't know what you meant by sharpening the stripes, so I didn't do that. (Also, this is kinda off-topic. But can someone fix my siggy so the time part doesn't show?)

Sorry, I meant smudge the edges of the stripes so they look a bit sharper, and then blur them out so it's smooth. I dunno about the siggie, though. When mine was doing that, I just deleted the category and put it on again. <span style="">06:26 Mon Sep 26

Ok, before I do anything else, is there anything else that should be edited? -- 11:13, September 27, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the earpink a bit and blur it. 23:34, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it lighter and blurred it more. Changes aren't showing yet. -- 00:43, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The changes are now showing. -- 19:49, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Should I brighten the ear pink/make it look more pink? -- 14:51, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Make the ear pink brighter. Comments? -- 11:27, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are now showing. -- 19:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is way too birght. Tone it down and darken it the center it more and blur it. -- 00:11, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Thanks Cloudskye for fixing the ear pink, since it was being a pain. Comments? -- 20:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Anything? Sorry for sounding impatient. 20:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you take all the colors from her warrior image? The pelt, stripe, and earpink colors don't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I took all the colors from her warrior image Paleclaw. 10:48, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, nvm. 20:34, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please? Anything? 11:31, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a little stiff. Perhaps blur them a little? Not smudge. -- 19:12, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I've been blurring them, the smudge always comes out messy when I do that x3. -- 23:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? I'd really like to work on my next charart... -- 23:24, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Patience is a virtue. Darken the earpink and blur the stripes. <span style="">23:38 Sun Oct 9

I'm withdrawing this. -- 20:36, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Changed the heading. If someone wants to take over, they may. 20:37, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

K, I steals it. XD I hate it, honestly. -.- <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 03:18, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Its not bad! Just blur the stripes more, and define the shading. 21:38, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh...I think I just made it worse. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 21:57, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (KP) ~ For Approval
My first image, what do you think? She has a KP name, so i made that image. Comments? Moonkitti 15:50, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm.. Blur the earpink 15:59, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good for your first image, round the bottom of her ear-pink Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. This is really good for your first image, Moonkitti! 16:06, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks guys! Changes aren't showing. Moonkitti 16:17, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She has got scar on her left eye but it doesn't matter, i think Leaf-storm,16:36,September 18,2011 (UTC)

I think that is her left eye o.O. Moonkitti 16:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! :D Define the tail highlights. And the scar looks kind of uneven o.O 16:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thanks, and that is because it is blurred. Moonkitti 17:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, changes aren't showing, it should be the 2nd one down. ;) Moonkitti 17:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Put highlights down the forearm, but not all the way to the bottom. 18:40, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

The scar goes on her other eye. Her left, not yours. 18:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a bit more. Mi st  y!  19:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Moved her scar over, add a highlight to her forearm, blurred the shading and highlights. Moonkitti 19:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I was fixing some blurred lineart. Moonkitti 01:21, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch and the front leg shading please? (I'm a bit naggy over shading xD) Mi  st  y!  01:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink curve with her head, it'll look more natural. 01:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Did she have a collar in the book? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">The evil juggler! 02:13, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading/highlights to the eyes. 20:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, the scar is on the wrong eye again. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 20:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It probably has to do with the server. Sometimes, the changes will show, and other times they won't. 20:15, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Flossie looks gray. I thought she was supposed to be black.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:14, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights less circular. Think about the muscles where the sun is hitting. That should make it look more natural. 01:12, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

@Kittycat, It is just the highlights. Get right on it. And the image is the 2nd one down. Moonkitti 02:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

And I don't know, so....I just went along with it, i don't have the book, so I can't check, but I'd think not, so should I get rid of it? Moonkitti 02:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Got rid of the colloar, i messed with the highlights and shaing, made her look more black. Moonkitti 02:46, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Love it! Blur the shading and highlights. 15:23, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy and kind of bright. Take it off of an approved black cat, such as Crowfeather 21:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Having no collar sort of gives me the impression that she's naked, but oh well. Blur the part where the highlights meet the shading and vice versa at the middle of her body.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:23, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, Crowfeather isn't black, he is dark gray. Hollyleaf or Shadowstar Would be better. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:51, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot ^^; Yeah, take Maplepool's suggestion instead. 21:09, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-i took the ear-pink from hollyleaf. I've blurred as much as i can on pixril, it is having no effect what-so ever, can someone with gimp do it fro me? Moonkitti 16:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks brown. Make it darker...I can't blur it for you, since I use pixlr too. 23:29, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Moonkitti is spending the night at my house, and what looks brown? She doesn't know..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:30, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

The scar is above her eye, not vertically down. Other than that, very pretty. 13:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye, just wanna let you know, when it says 'over her left eye' it means like, it starts above her left eye, and comes down over her eye, likewhe she closed it, it comes down like that. *Btw this moonkitti, spending the day at Maple's house :3 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 13:08, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a brown streak in the middle of the back. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Killer of Daleks 16:00, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

No, in the manga, it shows how the scar is placed. 18:56, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I don't have the manga, can you show me a screenshot? Or give me a link to how it looks? Moonkitti 20:53, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye's right. It's a zigzag scar above her left eye. I looked myself. 23:12, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Gosh, i looks bad. DX REuploaded Moonkitti 00:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't. Just move it over a bit and blur it more. 12:12, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Lol, it looks like a pink eyebrow xD Moonkitti 17:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

LOL, wow Moony, only you, my nutty friend, only you xD XD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 17:28, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the scar. It looks like a blob of bubble gum. xD Very good job, Moony! 17:56, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

xD Cloudeh. Uh... define the highlights and blur the earpink. And make the scar like.. a straight line, because if you make it all swirly, (or like bubble gum xD) it might be blotchy. ;3 23:09, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I still say it looks like a eyebrow ;P Give me a few mins, and I'll mess around with it Moonkitti 22:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the scar; its too light. 22:25, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Moonkitti 02:02, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Give the shading depth and blur it. 03:51, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-*faceplam* Wow, I feel SO smart, i thought i uploaded this and i was wondering why i was never getting comments on it, and i can't blur it anymore, it is having 0 affect, can someone with gimp blur it for me?...Moonkitti 20:33, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hey...i don't wanna do this anymore, and I REALLY wanna do Yellowfang's Queen image. If this isn't taken, then i'll do it again, but I love Yellowfang....and yeah..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:50, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Eh..Shellheart's already doing Yellowfang dude :I.... - 20:55, October 1, 2011 (UTC))

MOONKITTI, You are DEAD! Just because you are at my house does NOT MEAN YOU CAN USE MY ACCOUNT WHEN YOU ARE TO LAZY TO GET ON YOURS!!! Your going home, NOW moony! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * rolls eyes* Fine, fine, Maple, chill. Gosh, stop over-reacting. Moonkitti 21:01, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, do not say something like that again. Not here. If I ever catch you doing this on the PCA pages again, I'll be reporting you. If you have a problem with her, talk it up with her on her talk page, or IRL. NOT here. Moon, are you officially withdrawing this then? I'm asking because Shellheart's already taken Yellowfang's queen image. 21:04, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

If she does withdraw this, I would like to take over.. *hungry look in eyes* xD Or are only warriors and up aloud to do that?? o.o (just wondering)  M  i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   21:24, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Cloudy, I just didn't want people to think I'm Moonkitti, i could have been banned for that, for doing nothing. And Moony*Who is still here* is withdrawing this, and Misty, i think you can, not sure thou. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:57, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Misty, if you don't already have something reserved, you may take over. Maple, I understand. Just don't do it again, 'kay? 23:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

So can I just post the image? If so, Reuploaded Hope I did the shading right! M i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   22:40, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the highlights, make them less circular and fit them better with the muscles. 22:45, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Expanded the highlights and tried to make them less circular, how does it look? M i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   23:06, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Niceeee :3 Define the tail highlight. 20:57, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you ^-^ Anything else?

Sorry, that was me xD ^ 23:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed. XD Could you make the eyes like say.... Mitzi's for example? It think she has proper eyes. Other than that I see nothing wrong. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:27, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cross-eyed? Oh well. I changed it, anything else? :3 01:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and make the highlights bigger. Try to make the highlights like Sharpclaw's highlights, or Jake's. 23:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the earpink and made the highlights bigger, but I was confused on your other (request, I guess xD) Should I totally re-do the highlights/shading to copy theirs? 01:30, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yo, heads up, I just wanted to let you know that we're enforcing the date rule on the reservation table. Please add the date you reserved this sometime today. 04:56, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, sorry about that, but I put the date on it. :3 19:45, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, and maybe you should redo the highlights and shading to copy it. Whatever you can do. 00:56, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Felt like I had to redo it, how does it look? I know the earpink looks weird, and I will change that on your request. 01:53, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and blur the shading. 20:10, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the nose needs to be a darker version of the pelt color. 20:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading, but I was wondering if there was any tips on how to dull the highlights without having to re-do them completely... But If I have to, I will. 20:36, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm thinking that you might be able to brush the burn tool over the highlights, if it doesn't darken them too much. If you use layers, then you can just adjust the brightness to the highlight layer. 15:00, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used the burn tool to dull the highlights, how does it look? 16:39, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 17:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look fine to me now, but you really need to blur the edges of the shading as it looks like just big splots of light. Also, extend the highlights along like...half of the tail as it looks odd when it just stops. Nice work. 18:40, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the edges of the shading and extended the tail highlights, though the changes aren't showing.. 21:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the shading and highlights meet. 07:11, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink the slightest bit more 07:34, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred where the highlights and shading meet and the ear pink. :3 13:54, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hightlights on the back needs more blurring! Awe-so-me work! Leaf-storm,18:48,October 10,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it the best I could! Thank you ^-^

Sorry that was me. Dx ^  M  i  s  t  y  p  e b  b  l  e   23:12, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading or darken the highlights. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:53, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the shading and highlights meet. 17:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading and where the highlights and shading meet. 21:29, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading/highlights majorly. <span style="">23:49 Tue Oct 11

Reuploaded Blurred best I could using GIMP, how does it look? 19:40, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (A) ~ CBA
Here she is. Not bad in my opinion. Comments? 18:34, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink match the leader image, and lighten the spots to match as well. 18:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading also. 18:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the highlights, and can you make the highlights on the shoulder just a tad bit bigger? Oh, and blur the ear pink. x) Mi  st  y!  19:16, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I was gonna do this image. Oh well x) Blur the stripes on the tail. 19:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the markings along the chest match the leader image. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:49, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I lightened the markings, mathced the earpink, and blurred it. I blurred the tail stripes and darkened the shading, and blurred it. I think I kinda made the shading worse. 07:24, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make her front paws a bit more darker, (match the leader image with it, make them brown I guess xD) and blur the shading. Mi st  y!  20:08, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I blurred the shading, but don't think changes are showing that well. 07:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

The background should be transparent. 23:15, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

When I try to make it transparent, even the lineart turns white, can somebody help me with this? 08:54, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

What program do you use? If it's pixlr I can help. 13:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it is pixlr. 13:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Just make the black transparent even if it takes away the lineart. If it does, add another layer of the apprentice blank and make the white transparent with the fuzzy select tool. 16:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Stoney, if you are uploading it from your PC, that's the problem. When you go to select a blank, you click on it, right click, and select "Properties". Once you do that, copy the URL (it'll most likely start was warriors.wikia). When you go on pixlr, select "Open from URL", then paste the URL into that box and click "Ok". 12:09, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Good. Try to make it look like the others and also make the ear pink smaller and more highlights. Where is the light coming from? 22:27, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink against the pelt. Sandstorm - What exactly do you always mean by "more highlights"? Do you mean brighten them? Make them more vivid? Highlights are optional, and it's the artist's choice if s/he were to use them or not. Cloudskye, for example, never uses them. xD 22:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

What's the fuzzy select tool? 06:08, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I tried what Ivyheart said, I managed to add a white layer with lineart, but I couldn't make it transparent, made the earpink smaller, but I tried to redo the eye, and fill in a white pixel, but I couldn't fill in some certain places, or use the paint brush, and I don't know why. Can somebody do this for me? 06:33, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and re-uploaded. 06:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the background transparent, blur the shading under her chin, move the highlight down her shoulder and tone it down, even out the shading on her back, and enlarge the highlights on her haunch and tail. 00:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to make the background transparent for you? 03:16, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yes because I failed to do it. :( 10:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I made the backround transparent and fixed the eye, blurred the shading on the chin, and enlarged the highlights on her tail and haunch. 18:26, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. 23:18, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I defined the earpink and shading, changes are hardly showing, are the highlights too bright? 17:14, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more around the belly and haunch area. The highlights are fine, just blend them in a little more. 20:34, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - well, I fixed the highlights, and defined the shading. The markings were blurred to much so I fixed that too.

The spots are a bit too dark, and this needs to be named Leopardstar.apprentice.png. 15:28, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Just define some of the spots. <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 17:44, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

The spots look a bit blotchy, so try to fix that. Also make her paws golden/brown to match her leader image. 20:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, major change in image 'cause the markings were hard too fix, and I thought the shading and highlights needed major blurring. So I redid the whole image. I think this one looks way better than the other one. I renamed the image, and the highlights didn't help me with my charart, so I used very little highlights, and I made the paws darker. 08:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and darken the shading and blur it. 23:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I think the earpink still needs defining 13:25, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

It does. Define it more, and it should be ready. 21:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Defined the earpink. 06:11, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more bigger and triangular, and it also looks as if its touching the lineart. 23:51, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Made the earpink bigger. 17:56, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 17:52, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I really hate to disturb this, this is a great charart but the highlights look like they need to be blurred a bit more. 07:36, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Er, Am I supposed to work on it while it's on CBA? I don't know what to do. 08:38, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just here to answer a question.. Now its up for approval again, so you still work on it, since someone gave a request. (or something else xD) And can you define the ear pink a bit more? :3 It looks awesome! 13:50, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, Stoneclaw, you're supposed to work on it when someone suggests something during CBA. If someone comments, the image goes back to "For Approval", thus cancelling out the CBA. 06:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Now I know. Re-Uploaded. 12:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Opps, bold time stamp. *Oops 17:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Very nice image, Stoneclaw. 23:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (Ki) ~ For Approval
Gotta do this quick before the opening closes. Okay, I don't sync well with tabbies. This is a fail. Comments? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing 

Define the shading and possibly connect a few stripes to the other side of the lineart. :3 20:17, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes smaller, curvier, thicker, define the earpink, and darken the shading. ` 20:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but what exactly do you mean by connect the stripes? Shadewing  Blades of the Night 21:41, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think connecting the stripes means to commenct the small stripes to form thicker stripes. 21:43, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. 22:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink & define it --

Make the stripes thicker, and less of them. Darken the shading a bit too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:02, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I will get to that as soon as I can. I'm redoing the image. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:37, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Please produce the revised version soon, ok? 01:08, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - A thousand apologies. I was so busy, I had absolutely no time to work on it. I still hate it. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 19:31, September 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the stripes, define the highlights, shading, and earpink. And add a stripe or two to the hind leg. ;) 23:07, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the stripes a bit longer. 02:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Any better? Changes are not showing. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 22:10, September 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Nevermind, they are showing xD. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 22:16, September 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The stripes still don't quite match her other chararts. Make them thicker, longer, and darken the whole thing. 22:22, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes not showing. SleepingAngel  The angel is sleeping... 19:21, September 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing 

Define the shading some more. 20:00, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a little longer, and define the pupil, it kind of looks like she's blind, or has no cornea. :P 02:15, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Does it look any better? I feel like it's getting worse and worse. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 22:17, October 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the pelt color. 15:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate this friggin' charart. It's a piece of crap. >.> Sorry for my grumpiness, it's been a long day. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:47, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Heads up, we are now enforcing the time table rule, so sometime today please add in the date you reserved this. We'd greatly appreciate it. 05:02, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Sorry about that. I always forget. xC Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms...  19:39, October 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The base brown is a little off, Shadeh. Can you fix it? Take the brown from her warrior image. 06:14, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 16:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's odd. I did take the colors off her warrior image, Skye. Oh well, I'll try to fix it. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:40, October 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:57, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
My first charart! Yay! Picture: Darkstripe when he was described with a dark gray pelt. Comments? <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. And take the amber eye from his warrior image :3 22:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, so this will have to be declined. Sorry. :( 22:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is the right number now. Define the shading on the tail. 22:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the back leg (the one far away from us) needs shading. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">!  22:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :) Make the eye pupil (the black part) bigger. Also have less shading on the tail tip, or put highlights. 22:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is a female blank, use a male blank. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:46, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll improve it. Sorry Maple took the wrong blank <:3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know if the changes are showing yet... <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:54, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't he already HAVE an alt? Or is that for the black pelt? Also, blur the shading. 22:59, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the pupil and reposition/ blur the ear-pink. 23:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

@cloudskye Black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

He already has a black alt. This needs to be a silver tabby. And I fixed the title for you. 23:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There are actually four alt decriptions of Darkstripe: black, gray, silver tabby, and black with silver stripes (opposite of his real description). Pick one of the three that aren't done. 23:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll do silver tabby, since I already started that :P <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:23, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing he needs an alt for is being ark grey. He is everything else already. Ill decline alll the others. 23:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm confused :( This is a dark gray alt. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  23:48, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Nevermind, I'm just sticking with this. This is a dark gray alt, not a black one. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  00:04, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sotty. You had just originally said that he was black. 00:17, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kind of small.. Do you have the right sized blank? (or is it just me x3) If its the correct size then blur the shading a bit more. :3 Mi  st  y!  00:33, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I never said he was black! And the changes aren't showing yet. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  01:09, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah fix the highlights and darken the ear pink Good for a try! 03:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yay the changes are actually showing. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  11:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink by blurring it. It's too blotchy. Also, lighten the shading on the paws/legs. :3 12:57, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the title for ya ;3. And darken the highlights. 15:24, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  15:48, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

make the ear pink bigger and darker and also turn down the higjlights on the body and make the one on the face brighter too 22:25, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

center the ear pink <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 01:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are fine, Sandstorm. They just need to be to be blended with the shading more. 05:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur hightlights around a little, good work. I'm working on the silver tabby now. :-) Leaf-storm,20:00,September 27,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry, forgot to say re-uploaded before xD <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  22:40, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights and define the earpink. 22:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  16:15, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it just a tad more. And maybe try and make the ear pink a tad lighter. Other then taht this is beauitful. Though if you have dodge you can use that to lighten it. Just a helpful tip. :D Rain  face &lt;3 18:55, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing yet. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  19:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 19:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n  00:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and lighten the shading on the chest. Looking good! 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good, blur the neck shading (if any, it looks like it though) a tad more. Rain face &lt;3 19:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n21:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight. 22:54, October 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Other than that, looking good! 08:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! :3 <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 22:10, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still looks blotchy. Try blurring it a little more. 20:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, his shading is kinda covering the shoulder highlights. Please define the highlights on the shoulder where the shading is covering it. (a lot of words, and yes, i speak fast and type fast :P) Rain  face &lt;3 21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded So far so good (in my opinion ^-^). <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y   <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 21:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still blotchy, blur the the shading. 16:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink (is there any earpink at all?) and round out the haunch highlight. Also move the shoulder highlight up. <span style="">23:42 Sun Oct 9

Re-uploaded Yes, there is ear-pink. <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y    <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 14:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC) a lot Brighten the earpink more and blur the shading/highlights a lot more. Maybe take the earpink colour from Silverstream's current image if you're having trouble. <span style="">21:36 Mon Oct 10

There's not much to comment on except define the earpink (a lot :P) Good job, Lucky. This is really good. :) 21:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks, Twilight :D <font color="#adfffb" style=>L<font color="#4ffff3"  style=>u <font color="#00ffee"  style=>c <font color="#00ebdb"  style=>k <font color="#0bd4c6"  style=>y    <font color="#ffe0fb" style=>H <font color="#ffc4f7"  style=>e <font color="#ffa6f3"  style=>a <font color="#f78de9"  style=>r <font color="#f76de5"  style=>t  <font color="#ffd38c"  style=>o <font color="#ffc05c"  style=>f  <font color="#fa3939"  style=>a  <font color="#acffa6"  style=>l <font color="#77ff6e"  style=>i <font color="#56ff4a"  style=>o <font color="#11ff00"  style=>n 22:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, and blur the shading more. 01:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and smooth the shading and highlights; they're really blotchy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:58, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define your light source. The shading on the haunch is inconsistent with the rest of the shading on him and shouldn't be at the bottom, but rather in the middle of his haunch. 15:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. 17:15, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you're smudging the shading einstead of blurring. 07:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * instead 07:53, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm blurring. And since I gotta go, I will work on this the day after tomorrow (maybe) because my dad will be on tomorrow.

Silverstream (Ki) ~ CBA
Finally! An opening! Minnowkit was approved, so I sprang for the next available character, which happened to be Silverstream's kit. Comments? <font face="Papyrus" font color="#4271d6"> Twilight <font face="Chalkduster" font color="#3366FF">&lt;3 Mangos, Volleyball, and Horses 05:13, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute! :3 Define the shading 12:16, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Adorable! :3 Lighten the nose a bit. 12:56, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Re-Uploaded 14:01, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Try do make the nose gray not black and add some swirls to it 14:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm... that made no sense :P Define the shading a tad more on the paws. 15:56, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

She's meaning make it look like the old queen, she must not know we re-did her queen images. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:12, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Yeah, they re-did the queen, Sandstorm. Just check. Kept the tabby stripes the same, made the nosepink gray-ish, Defined shading on paws. Wait for the changes to show

Define the tabby-M on her head. It was made a prominent feature in CP, as her forehead markings match those of Willowbreeze. 17:35, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 17:45, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

darken the highlights a bit. Looks great =) <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  00:16, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I forgot the highlights in this charart, so I can't necessarily darken them ;3 I thought it looked kind of good without them after I saved it... :P 00:36, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make her stripes like that of http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Silverstream.warrior.png And make sure you make her tail-tip black like on her warrior image as linked above. Also her highlights/normal pelt and her shading are wayyyyyy too seperate and defined.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 09:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 22:58, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to match her other chararts. 22:03, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not working on it...Twilight's a bad girl...Anyway, I'll work on it now. 20:51, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded The new stripes are smaller and I lightened the shading a tad because I couldn't really see the new stripes... 21:08, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty Twilight. Rain face &lt;3 22:33, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. =) 22:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

@Rain Thanks

@Misty Will do, I just need to finish up with my school work before I do that. 23:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changes ain't aren't showing yet~ 16:33, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Sorry, Twilight has a tendency to say ain't. If I ever say it, excuse me... =(

Define the earpink, and make the stripes thinner. 00:42, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will, but at the moment, my computer is being fixed, and I have lost the pen to my tablet. I'll work on it soon. 20:33, October 6, 2011 (UTC) Also, is it just me or is the font looking a bit big? =(

Are you still working on this, Twilight? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I am. Sorry, for not working on it. 22:27, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 22:40, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. I see nothing wrong. <span style="">23:45 Tue Oct 11

Make her stripes blacker and thinner and add more, and add one above her nose to to match her warrior image.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:55, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Kitty, there's only so much you can fit on an image before it becomes cramped. Although you're right about the stripe on the nose. 00:57, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded The changes aren't showing, yet. 01:15, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 14:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
My first charart. I don't think it's good. Comments? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  3:25, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the markings to match her other images. Color-pick it off directly, it should help 03:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 04:43, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the base pelt color to match her leader image. (Wait. I think my eyes are playing tricks on me. I dunno...) 05:24, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Use the female kit blank. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:28, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the shading more. 11:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now I think there are two options to the blank, you can either re-do it on the female kit blank or add the eyelashes yourself. Also, the spots need to match Leopardstar's leader image. This is really cute! 12:45, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

It'd be easier to just add in the eye lashed, or add a layer that has the female kit blank on top of it. You don't have to redo it. Darken and emphasize the shading. :) 12:50, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color a little different then the pelt. 21:39, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The spots are brown, make them gold. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, match all the colors and designs from her leader version. ` 22:44, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also want to mention that I did color pick the colors off her leader image, so I didn't change the colors yet. It could be just the shading and the highlights, but I don't blame you. At least the main color is. I need help doing this. Do I have to re-do it? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to, since I don't think you can change the spots without redoing them, and they need to be golden... 00:53, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah they look sorta like the warrior and deputy except a bit lighter. It would prob take less word to just re-do it.. 17:16, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded hmmm.. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  02:20, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

On her leader charart, it shows her with golden/brown paws.. Can you fix that? Mi st  y!  13:15, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The paws were already colored.. looks better now anyway. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 02:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 04:13, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  00:21, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job so far! But can you make the right ear pink a bit more triangular? 20:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall

00:00, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the spots just a tiny bit darker, make the spots on the chest more round, and brighten the earpink a bit. I really like this! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and the highlights are blotchy. Blur them so they're smoothed out. 22:22, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I need to blur the shading and highlights more, but I'll wait. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 06:28, October 7, 2011 (UTC) Yes, the shading and highlights are still a little blotchy, so blur them a little more. Other than that, this is looking good! 06:42, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yes! I'm finally getting somewhere here! <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 08:05, October 8, 2011 (UTC) Blur the paws' shading some more. This is getting lovely. :3 17:38, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 04:24, October 9, 2011 (UTC) Define the spots some. 17:54, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">23:45 Sun Oct 9

Define the earpink. -- 07:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't like how that one spot near the edge of the pelt at the top of the body is darker than the other spots <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 05:15, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really blotchy, blur it. 07:55, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Flight (PH) - For Approval
I love this xD Comments? 00:37, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes, make the mud a lighter color as it looks like shading, darken the back foot unless that's supposed to be mud, add depth to the eye 00:39, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define her stripes. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:19, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink -- 01:21, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, you don't need to repeat what I've said. It's just a friendy reminder for the future, ok? 01:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights and darken/define the shading on the head. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add a stripe to the back of the ear, it stands out from the rest of the body. 04:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this version better. 20:35, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is really cool. Define the mud a little more, maybe to do that make it more reddish. 23:22, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches in all directions instead of make it in a straight line. And I'd say take the mud color from an approved cat, let me see if there is a similarly colored cat with mud on it. 00:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make it look more like her queen. 17:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Loudsplash, please be more specific. Like her queen how? The color, the stripes? What exactly do you mean? 19:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

It does look like her queen. I took all the colors from her queen image, and I tried my best on the stripes. 21:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the stripes. 22:41, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for reuploading late guys, I'm just so busy these days! 19:40, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks look pink. Make them brown. 21:15, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate mudstreaks. >.< Anyways, I hope this gets on CBA now! 14:55, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to smudge the mud like I said before. It's too conform. 22:04, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud from the stripes. Define the stripes and make them more prominent; they're a bit smudgy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone help me with the mudstreaks? They're really getting on my nerves. 11:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you if you used layers for this and the mud is on a seperate layer. 15:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I used layers on GIMP. And I put the mud on a seperate layer too :P 22:19, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll give you my email, send me the .xcf file and I'll fix the mud for you, as I have done a Tribe cat before. 23:20, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded me and Wildy couldn't figure out the layers thing so I just went ahead and uploaded it here. I made it like Screech's. Hope that helps. 00:25, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you so much! It looks great now! :D 00:49, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnbright (Ki) - For Approval
Ok, i was little confused with Darkstripe but its ok, I start working on this cat today's morning, ok this is my work...its my first kit Leaf-storm,19:02,October 4,2011 (UTC)

Pretty, darken the shading. Rain face &lt;3 19:12, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Awwwww <3 she's so cute Define the ear-pink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:20, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Blur where the ginger and white meet on the belly, please. 19:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

And the tail as well :3 20:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail a lighter gray. 20:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little...neon. Did you take the color from her warrior? It seems a bit off, I apologize. But the color is a bit hard on the eyes. It's very cute though, don't get me wrong. 20:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color the same as the other pixils, I don't think he was described with a different eye color at any time, so I'm pretty sure it should be the same as the main ones. Also lighten the whole image, it's a bit dark now for dark grey, it looks almost black. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, there was an edit conflict, and I copied the wrong on of my posts. XD Anyways, it seems like the ears are lighter than the rest orf the image. Is it just me? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:46, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened shadings, defined ear pink blurred white and made something with tail and darkened ears, comments? Leaf-storm,11:04,October 5,2011 (UTC)

Epic! Blur the shading on the back paw, the paw farthest from us on our right, it's left. Rain face &lt;3 18:13, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlight on the tail. Looks great! 22:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,11:38,October 6,2011 (UTC)

Tone down the brightness of the ginger a bit, so it matches the warrior image. <span style="">22:37 Thu Oct 6

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,11:39,October 7,2011 (UTC)

DEfine the shading, it may just be me, but I can hardly tell where the light source is. 12:43, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

ehm..reuploaded ... Leaf-storm,14:09,October 8,2011 (UTC)

This still needs to be more of a pastel orange. Look at the warrior image for reference. <span style="">00:00 Mon Oct 10

reuploaded.. I still cant find the right color Leaf-storm,13:58,October 10,2011 (UTC)

No it looks good now :3 Blur the earpink just a little bit. <span style="">05:18 Tue Oct 11

reuploaded Leaf-storm,13:51,October 11,2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval


Ok, second charart. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:15, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, noticed i forgot the ear pink, i'll fix that. Rain face &lt;3 19:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Add nose-pink, blue the highlights, and make them smaller, make the shading larger, and define it, and blur the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, is the black supposed to be shading? If so, please lighten it and blur it. It looks like a whole other tone to the fur. The nose should be dark gray, since Blackclaw is a black cat. 19:24, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur, blur and blur some more. Also, did you get the eye color from either the warrior or elder images? It seems a little off. 19:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this one was a TOTAL fail. gonna re-do it so i can make the shading right and... yea. Everything that you guys said. Rain face &lt;3 19:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Crud monkies! forgot to blur. What else will i forget today? Rain face &lt;3 20:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 20:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better ^-^ Now make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 22:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Take the pelt color from one of his other images, this is a bit too light. Looking great though! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 01:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at it for a REALLY long time (actually, it was only like, 30 seconds :P) and I can't find anything i could complain about. it looks purrfect:P<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 20:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the nose needs to be darker than the pelt, so it should be almost as dark as the lineart. Also, define the shading and blur the earpink more. 21:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks bluey. '''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 23:01, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur blur and blur more (the shading. Everywhere) 01:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 02:22, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to lighten the shading, it looks blacker then it should be. Blend it in with the pelt some more as well. 22:41, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image a bit; right now I can't even tell the lineart from the pelt colour. <span style="">22:40 Thu Oct 6

The shading looks weird. Blend it with the highlights. For an example of a black kit, look at Hollyleaf's kit image (remade by me, funnily enough). 19:50, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my cpu stopped working. I will get started on it. Question, how did you make the chest so bright though? Rain face &lt;3 16:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind. I had to use gimp for it. Re-uploaded. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and also add some earpink. (Hope it's the right one...) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and Treat 05:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope i got it all. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  12:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rain, this is fabulous! Define the earpink a little. I wish I could do a black cat like this one. 20:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, defined more. Thanks Ivy, though i think that you can do amazing black cats also. *gives a hug so she will feel better* Any way, comments? Rainfacestar Vampire time!  01:20, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I think this still looks completely black. It needs to be lightened a lot and then the shading needs to be darkened. <span style="">06:17 Mon Oct 10

Dude, it's not black. It's the dark-gray from the other image. I won't fix it unless someone else argues about it. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  10:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it. It's not completely black, but it's still too dark. 15:28, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you brighten the ear pink just a tad? Not a lot, though. I'm very picky with ear pink.. xD 01:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 06:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think the changes are showing, i only defined the ear-pink a bit so... yea. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  10:38, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Take the ear pink right from his elder or warrior images. They're not the same. 19:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (alt.K) ~ For approval
Comments? 22:25, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Redden the earpink some :3 22:53, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly darken the eye color, awesome job! 00:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color the same as the other pixils, I don't think he was described with a different eye color at any time, so I'm pretty sure it should be the same as the main ones. Also lighten the whole image, it's a bit dark now for dark grey, it looks almost black. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading & the earpink on the left seems brighter then the one on teh left, idk if its the highlights or not x) -- 01:27, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading some? I'm having a little difficulty seeing it, but it could just be my computer (if other people disagree with me then just ignore my comment) 03:45, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

No, i agree, i am having difficulty seeing the shading also. When you define the shading, blur it. Rain face &lt;3 18:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Same here. Also, make the ear pink, well, more pink. 19:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur where the shading and highlights meet. 15:34, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit unnatural.. Can you make it more triangular and less blotchy? 19:19, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the earpink. <span style="">00:05 Mon Oct 10

Blur, umm, the highlights make it look a tad flat also. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  02:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 06:34, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Senbonzakura ''' Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 00:48, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the ear pink, and move it back into the ear. Some of it leaks down onto the head itself. Try using the smudge tool if you're confused on how to move it. 14:51, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:49, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (Q) - For Approval
ok, every time i put this up there's too many, but i'm hoping this one isn't a mistake and there really is room for it. anyway, hwo do you like it?<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 01:33, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, the ear farthest from us should be brown, not white. Make the white on her face closer to her eyes. Add a light part/highlight to her haunch. And yes this will stay. Nice job on this so far! 01:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading...a lot, especially on the hanch, tail, chest, and face. Also make the transition of the white and brown smoother by blurring it. Desaturate the earpink a bit and darken her eyes. Possibly make her stripes a bit larger too. ;) 01:39, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Atelda, you made me edit conflict about three times D:< Define the shading and enlarge the highlights. Extend them as well in the appropriate light sources. 01:43, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also turn the ear brown, and make the grey parts an almost white. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Allons-y! 02:11, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redo the stripes to match the warrior image, and use the kit image as a reference for how the white should look. 02:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ok now i failed horribly! I tried to define the highlights and shading more on the haunch and places, and now it's all light in some places and dark in others! And omg, I just realized i forgot to redo the stripes like the warrior image:( I feel like such and idiot, i'll try again.<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 05:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, the changes aren't showing! :( It wouldn't let me reupload a new version, i have to upload it again and it won't show up again:(. This is annouying. but when it shows, this one is fixed, it took me a long time but now it makes me feel like less of an idiot:). I also noticed that the white belly goes through one of her eyes in the warrior charart, so i did that too.<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 06:46, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

kk, now the changes are showing.<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 06:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Take the colors from her Warrior charart (not the MC one), match the stripes to her warrior charart too. Color in her eyes, dull and blur the earpink, blur the white, make the white not go over her right (our left) eye, and remove the white to the right of her front arm. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:26, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color darker, because it looks like she doesn't even have any eye color. Blur the ear pink too. 11:26, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge and blur the white where it meets with brown more, blur ear-pink and add some more stripes on the belly and back and one stripe on neck if you want, and the eye color can be darker it looks like yellow to me, Leaf-storm,11:34,October 8,2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 14:03, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

i will try to fix these things, but when i try to dull the highlights it goes crazy and i end up having to do all the brown over again. I took these colors straight from her warrior image, i might have done it wrong but i took the eyedropper and put it on this image. if there is any other way to do it PLEASE tell me because the eyedropper keeps picking up the highlights and shading and doesn't get the right color. and I have tried many times, if i darken the eye color anymore it turns gray. can someone please send me and example of what color her eyes should be? And lastly, Paleclaw, when I put this up before I got complaints that her chest goes a little beyond her front legs and there should be a little white there, too. I don't want to repeat it as shellheart told me that i need to have it a little past the front legs.<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;"> Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;"> like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 17:33, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

But the kit image that Shelly said to reference needs to be tweaked to match her Warrior version. Work off that one, not the others. And on the Warrior one, it ends right above the legs. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:33, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I got the colors of her eyes from the warrior image for you: <font color="#fbcc17">#FBCC17, <font color="#b18100">#B18100 , and <font color="#eaae0c">#EAAE0C. Also, the earpink isn't the right color. It should be more like: <font color="#ec5350"> #EC5350 Blur the earpink more, too. 18:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, everything that i can complain about it (no offense bluey) has already been stated. XD Rainfacestar  Vampire time!  02:04, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Err...Rainfacestar, that is a little uncalled for. Please be nice, and also, it is uncontributive to just say "I agree", it's like repeating someone's criticism. 02:09, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes don't match the current stripes on her warrior image; tweak them so they do. <span style="">21:42 Mon Oct 10

Blur and make her ear pink more triangular. It looks like its touching the line art. 01:18, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt color please. The brown doesn't match her warrior image. 06:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I try to copy the colors, but they're really hard because when i use the eyedropper it keeps picking up highlights and shading. i'll try, and i really apprecitace the help with the colors, twilightheart. I will work on it when I have more time, but I have a BIG problem... i'm going to be gone for a week on vacation where I won't have internet acess. Is there a way I could keep this charart while i'm gone?--<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;"> Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;"> like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 09:53, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Are you going to be gone for exactly seven days? I think it can be five days and you can keep it. Is there any way you can get on during that? Also, the numbers that are colored above are the colors you can use for this. If you don't know how to how to use the numbers as colors, then print screen that section, then use the color-picker tool and pick them off the colors :3  15:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

If it's alright and she's going to be gone for a week, may I take over with her permission? 15:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Be patient, let's find out if it's 5 days or a week. 15:32, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 15:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bluey, if you are having issue's with this, just ask for help. Anyone here on PCA will more then gladly help you. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  19:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blue will be gone for five days. For some reason, she's having issues editing the section. Check my talk page for proof. 19:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt. L) - For Approval
Color comes from Lionstar. Golden is different than ginger/flame-colored. Please do not decline this. I know that there may be some confusion, but golden is Lionstar, which is different compared to Firestar. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 14:03, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well...Brackenfur has a ginger alt, so I think it should be alright. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and Treat 14:12, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and I think the eyes should be green :-) Leaf-storm,14:12,October 8,2011 (UTC)

He was accidentally described with amber eyes, so that's why they are amber. :) <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 14:17, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok,ok its you cat not mine :-) Leaf-storm,14:23,October 8,2011 (UTC)

Doesn't he have to be tabby? Since of the new rule?? (the one that applied to Goldenflower) Just wondering. :3 14:30, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Golden is different than ginger. Golden is not a shade of ginger. Darken the highlights a tad. 14:34, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 14:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the highlight or highlight reminisce from his foreleg, darken the shading on his face and under his chin, and make the ear and nose pink consistent. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:20, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think he should actually get one. Yes, golden is different from ginger, but I don't think it's different enough. Brackenfur DOES NOT have a ginger alt, it's russet. It's been brought up many times about Brackenfur's alt, and I think this is basically opposite of that. Brackenfur's golden, and described as ginger, Firestar's ginger and's described as golden. I really don't think he should get an alt. But anyways, if this stays up, his eyes should be green. you only make them a different color if he was described with that color at the same time, not in a different book. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add the tear in his ear and add a scar on his flank. Scars on alts should match unless the new description says otherwise. 23:11, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes his eyes should be an alt colour, and lighten the legs, theyre to dark and a funny colour. 21:39, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well since Lionstar's is getting stripes, this should too. 21:47, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose-pink the same colour as the ear-pink. 06:28, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights. 06:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Lionstar is light ginger, this is golden, I don't believe this needs stripes. <font color="white" style="background:black">☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the scar. 23:27, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not completely sure if it's just my computer or not, but the shading seems tinted green. Could you fix that? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:53, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading along his left side of his face. The head w/o shading looks unnatural, and wouldn't be that way in real life. 01:59, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Q) - For Approval
I know, I forgot the M stripe on her forehead. I'll add that when I re-upload it. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:16, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be on the other side of the tail, if you're matching the warrior version. The apprentice version isn't consistant... =/ 07:39, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is a little too bright. Darken it. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  08:05, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a tad lighter. 00:05, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just mee but the her right eyes is looking a tad unatural. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  02:06, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:04, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge and define the earpink a tad :3 <span style="">05:11 Tue Oct 11

Aren't the stripes supposed to match Silverstream's stripes? I'm not sure, but I saw her other versions on the tweak list for that. 21:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not sure about her markings, I checked the book and I didn't see anything about her having markings like her mother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:57, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the chest highlight a tad. Senbonzakura ''' Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 00:50, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Uhh... There is no chest highlight... - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:29, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Floss (KP) ~For Approval
Comments? 04:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty! Can you blur the design on her collar a teensy bit? It looks a tad bit hard-edged. 04:15, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Just curious, because she gets a kittypet, would that mean the others do too? Like, Daisy and Smokey? 04:38, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Yes it does but Wildheart already has Smokey reserved. 04:42, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Daisy? xD 04:43, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

No one has her, I don't think. Four edit conflicts. Oi! ...Darken the shading, please. 04:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I snatched Daisy. Anyway, the shading on the flipped ear is a little dark, it looks too gray. Lighten it, please? :) 04:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Since you said that, let me clarify my comment. Darken the shading on the back. 04:47, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 18:00, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty ^^. Could you add a bit of ear pink to her other ear? 00:02, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Only one of the ears gets pink. Don't you look at the other kittypet images? o.o 00:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I do Cloud, it was just a suggestion... 00:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Bad cloudy! Your probably gonna make her sad. Any way, this is beautiful Iceheart. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  02:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the ear. <span style="">06:20 Mon Oct 10

If I was sad, I would have gotten off. Lighten the shading on her ear a bit. 10:56, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 19:26, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

"Bad Cloudy"? Dude, wtf. >.>;; Anyways, can you move the ear pink below the shading? I'm having the same issue here as I was with the queen image. (God...my eyes are going....) 03:24, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 15:17, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (Q) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:41, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blue the edges of the highlights just a tad. 04:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also, lighten up the earpink too. :P 05:04, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I'll re-do the earpink later 05:16, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Did you fill in the nose? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and Treat 05:27, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nope....I'll go do that now. xP 05:30, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:35, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back stops a bit where the big highlight is. Fix that. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  08:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlight on the tail a bit bigger. 13:52, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Maybe dim the shading just a tad on the stomache. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  01:28, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:41, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. <span style="">06:21 Mon Oct 10

Make the highlights a tad thicker, since she's glossy looking. 23:26, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rainey.... I can't see teh ear pink. Where'd it run away to? Did you eat it? 03:26, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this is way better than my version. Maybe darken the highlight on the face a tad, and i agree to make the ear-pink more visible. Great job! -- ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ 8362☮♫  18:46, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 11:18, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little. 12:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Ki) - For approval
Comments? 12:02, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Just added the section in. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and gimmie candy 12:06, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little. 14:28, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 19:01, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks to brown. Make it pink. 00:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 16:58, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a tad. It's too candy-floss pink XD <span style="">21:45 Mon Oct 10

Re-Uploaded 17:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. I see nothing wrong. <span style="">23:40 Tue Oct 11

Can you move the ear pink up about a pixel on ---> ear? It looks kinda odd. Other then that, job well done, Speckle! 14:53, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Thanks XD and Re-Uploaded 15:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Daisy (KP) ~ For Approval
Daisy looks good in blue. I like her collar. Comments? 14:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little. This is marvelous, darling, simply marvelous! ;) 14:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Her pupils look a little weird xD Try doing the eyes like Smudge's kittypet charart. 14:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is stunning XD Darken the shading on the back a tad. 15:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I didn't change the eyes because really you can make them look how you want. However if it becomes a problem I can change it. 16:16, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, she kinda looks a little cross-eyed... I would just move the white in her left eye to her right a little to make it better. :3 20:47, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yea. This is BEAUTIFUL ivy! blur the shading JUST a tad. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  21:38, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, when was Daisy ever a kittypet? She was a loner, then a queen. 23:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

From re-reading the second arc, I've never seen her mentioned as one. 23:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Up above, Iceheart mentioned that she would get one, as with Smoky and Floss. I'm not sure how they would qualify to receive one, though.. 23:34, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes but they take food from twolegs and have been called kittypets multiple times. I already had this discussion with the other leads and we all agreed theyd get one. End of story. 23:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright then, Iceheart's the boss. Refocus the pupils, it looks like she's about to pass out. 00:33, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pfffft XD Anywhooo define the earpink! Nice work! - 02:12, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Done, done, and done. You're right, now that I look at it, it does look like she's gonna pass out. Sorry about that. Did I do the eyes right? I'm pretty sure it matches Sharpclaw's but I'll check anyway. 02:46, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. This is beautiful! 05:29, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a tad. <span style="">06:22 Mon Oct 10

Reuploaded. 14:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely. I see nothing wrong :3 <span style="">23:32 Tue Oct 11

Darken the shading a bit. Other than that, this is wonderful! 12:32, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Millie (Alt. KP) - For Approval
Ok, so I took all the colors directly from the cover of the manga and copied the stripes exactly (you all know how I hate triangle tabbies, but it's like her being described with those stripes exactly so what the hey?) It is a major change from her gray pelt. (silently lol'ing as people scrabble to reserve her loner alt.) Anywhoo, comments for improvement? 00:04, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blr the shading. 00:05, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tad. Lurvely <3 <span style="">00:07 Mon Oct 10

Wow, this is really pretty! Make the ear pink smaller. -- 00:09, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded before Silvereye's comment, I'll go do that now  00:11, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok done  00:18, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think she was seen with white paws as well. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:21, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, it was a light tanish cream color for her paws. 00:27, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm let me go look. I only have the first one of the mangas. 00:30, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Really like this one! ^-^ Once you get the white paws, can you blur the shading on the front leg a bit more? 00:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I thought alternates from the mangas weren't allowed to be done. I once tried to put up Russetfur's white deputy alt from the manga, and it was declined.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 00:47, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

That was a long time ago, times have changed. Mapleshade got her manga alt so there's no reason that Mille shouldn't. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Your's was probably posted before it was decided they could be done. 01:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:01, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Does that mean Leafstar gets one? 02:47, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

None that I agree with, because her main description is a brown tabby, the only changed color is cream vs. white, and if Leafstar had been originally made like I pictured her, there'd be little difference aside from the white/cream. This is kind of a debated topic among me and the leads right now though xD  03:29, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hey! Awesome! I love it. Blur ear pink..(Leaf-storm is trying make Leafstar's alt heh xD) Leaf-storm,14:00,October 10,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! And why does everyone seem to think she needs one? I, for one, don't.  16:19, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar? Alt? I think she must get one Leaf-storm,19:17,October 10,2011 (UTC)

Must I copy-paste what I wrote above again? If you feel that strongly about it then start a forum or a new section on the talk page, this isn't helping Millie's image any xD  21:35, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Please dont start a forum Leafstar isnt getting one. The ear pink shouldnt be touching the lineart. 21:38, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and sorry, I just don't want to start a thing on my image about who gets one and who doesn't.  21:44, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a TINY bit. 15:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded On a side note, my signature is shaming me with its messed up timestamp once again -_-  15:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Dull the earpink a bit. Senbonzakura ''' Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 00:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Darkened it a tad. 17:59, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (ki) ~ For Approval
Aww, she looks happy for once. Anyway, Yellowfang was mentioned with her kit and apprentice names in the Warriors App, if anyone was curious. Comments? 01:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful Shelly. Maybe darken the shading on the tail and on the legs. Amazing! Rainfacestar Vampire time!  01:26, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

So purdy. :) There is some waste above her ears. 02:40, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

She looks...odd without torn ears or the flattened face. xD Blur the where the shading meets the highlight in the chest. `<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 02:52, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You went and challenged me there, Sky. I gave her a Persian muzzle. Yup, just like that. Blurred shading. Forgot to darken it. I'll do it next time I upload. 03:38, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'd take the lines around the mouth away: they just make her look like she has a mustache:3 you can't really tell it's supposed to be a muzzle. <span style="">06:23 Mon Oct 10

What wildheart said. It makes her look like a bulldog o3o. -- 10:53, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes....does look...odd. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 11:23, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

This looks amazing. But I still can't read the font >.<  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 14:06, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the muzzle and lightened the shading. If I can't do it that way, how can I make the muzzle look flat? 17:17, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not really sure, anyway the nose looks bigger than the kit blank. This is cute! 19:03, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

@Loudsplash It's supposed to be like that, since she's a Persian. -- 19:40, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add very faint, dark gray lines where you had the original black ones. 21:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I was watching Cats 101, the Persian one, and persians' eyes, nose, and mouth all line up. So please make it like that. 23:17, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, only purebred persians have faces like that, but since I tried it and it just looked funny... for the moment, and for your entertainment: Yellowkit knows your secret! XD 23:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dear StarClan....xD I would blur the shading a tad more. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 02:07, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oi vay.... *facepalm* Darken the shading a bit. 03:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Haha, sorry. Couldn't help myself. Okay, fixed the face, darkened the shading, and blurred it as far as it would go. 03:46, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste around the paws and beneath the tail. 05:59, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Got rid of all the waste I could find. 17:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smoky (KP) ~ For Approval
Comments? <span style="">03:07 Tue Oct 11

Define the shading on the gray area of his rump xD  03:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded teehee rump. <span style="">03:18 Tue Oct 11

^_^ Blur the gray patch on his face. 04:58, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 06:26, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And the shading by his belly. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 22:17, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">23:30 Tue Oct 11

Make the ear-pink a tad pinker. 15:44, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Millie (Alt. Lo) ~For Approval
This looks AWFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cry* 14:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

You need to make an outline of her collar, and you need to copy my stripes. The stripes have a darker brown in the middle and are smudged into her pelt. She doesn't have all those stripes on her legs, so get rid of those. 14:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And hey, also, if you are having trouble telling from my image, you could always look at what she looks like in the mangas. It should show you what the stripes look like and how many :3 Don't get down about it, just do these things and it should help. 15:00, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, ugh this looks so sloppy :| 15:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nahhhh now whatd did I say xD At least it matches. Add lines to the nametag of her collar, darken the shading, make her paws and muzzle a little paler using the dodge tool, there is some blurred lineart on the ear closest to us, and define the earpink/make it less blotchy. If you put yourself down, then no it won't get any better. Just think positive and before you know it, it'll get approved :3 15:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Don't be to hard on yourself, every artist has different artistic views. ;) 15:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED any better? I honestly love Millie. (I wish she would've stayed a cream tabby, she would've been so much prettier) 15:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is to large, and it's covering the lineart, make it smaller. 15:47, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED lol, is this any better, I have serious issues with earpink lol. 16:24, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's better, but still a little different from Ivy's. Try making them have a soft point on the end. 16:31, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

You need to work under the lineart, not on top of it. I can tell you how depending on the program you use. Do you use GIMP? 17:03, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you don't need to work under the lineart. She can use layers, and it's a lot easier. I don't work under the lineart, and my images are just fine. Loudsplash, darken the shading as well. 17:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but I still think it'd be easier. Again, if you'd rather work under the lineart and aren't sure how, just ask. ^^ In any case, you have some stripes going over the lineart that need fixing. 17:42, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, how do you work under lineart? I have no clue how to use layers XD And or how do you do layers too. I think it would be best ust for me to find out now. 17:58, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if you're using Gimp, it's pretty simple. Select the tool that looks like a wand (aptly names the wand tool) and select the white on the base charart. Then just hit Ctrl+X and it will vanish. Do this for all white areas. Then you go the the layers section and make a new layer by hitting the button that looks like a piece of paper with its corner folded down. Drag the new layer you make underneath the original layer and, viola, you can work under the lineart. This way you can't go over any lines and you won't smudge any lines either. 18:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I tried it and I was confused so I just went back to pixlr. I think it's a lil better :| Can you give me an honest answer, does this look like it's showing improvement? And changes aren't showing. Btw it won't stop being on the heading :| 19:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

It happens. Probably just a wiki thing. 19:07, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yea. Any way, can you add more stripes? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  19:19, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, because it needs to match mine and mine matches her manga depiction. 19:21, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I just wanted to say lol cuz for a second I thought u meant it isn't showing improvement :P 19:31, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Epic fail xD Lol no, it is showing improvement. You still need to add lineart to her collar tag though 19:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 19:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the squiggly line in the middle of the collar. It doesn't need to be there. 20:28, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the tail highlight and smooth out the collar tag lineart. 20:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Let me tell you. You aren't going to get ANYWHERE if you scream insults at yourself and abuse exclamation points and claim to cry. Make the stripes more like Millie's alt. 23:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur it. It looks blotchy. Also, it's hitting the left lineart on the ear. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 00:54, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If you're using pixlr, do the same as Shelly said, but to add a layer, go on layers, add layer, select layer 1, go to layers again, and click on move layer down. Define the earpink. 07:45, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, dear stripes, collars, and ear pink, I hate you lol :P 12:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, it's a bit better, have patience, and you should be able to accomplish your goal. ;) There is a line above the shoulder that's sticking out of the image, please fix that. 12:29, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED fixed :) 13:01, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 13:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

How do you define earpink? 14:02, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

By making it more visible. Perhaps reddening it or sharpening it. 19:34, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (alt.K) ~ For approval
Comments? 23:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh beautiful, Misty. Define the ear-pink, darken the shading on her forelegs, and blue the shading on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:04, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Connect a stripe or two. 23:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't that Hawkfrost who was the gray kit, though? 23:12, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, it was Mothwing. Hawkfrost was his regular color, brown. And, I'm not changing the stripes, since I like them separate like that, but I'll do the earpink and shading. 23:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

RE-Uploaded. 23:15, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful XD Blur the ear-pink on -> side. 15:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:32, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt.W) - For Approval
Ew. Everyone hide. Comments? 23:07, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't bad Ice, it's amazing! Blur the stripes more. 23:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I refuse to believe that. I blurred the stripes more. 23:12, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the shading. There is a little waste/blurred lineart on the top of her haunch. A thin stripe on her shoulder looks blotchy. Nah don't be pessimistic. 23:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Toned down the shading. That "waste" was a stripe, so I deleted that and I thickened the stripe on the shoulder. And, ಠ_ಠ 23:20, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Add some more stripes to the right side of the tail. 00:01, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Come on, Icestorm. Weren't you just telling Bluey that you won't get anywhere insulting yourself? It looks fine, but maybe lighten the earpink a bit. 00:30, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! But I think there is either waste or blurred lineart along her back and on her tail. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 00:56, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadeiwng

But it's true, SHelly ;_; I'll see if I can fix that, but I can't work on it today cause GIMP's being stupid. 01:13, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is awesome. The earpink is a bit too red, make it more pink. 07:39, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. Q) ~ For Approval
Comments? I redid it, and also renamed it. It needs to be queen.alt in order for the template to work correctly. 16:41, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tiny bit and make the earpink larger. 17:30, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shading is fine, I think. I did fix the ear pink though. Re-uploaded. 17:44, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is bootiful. Maybe dull the earpink a 'tiny bit' 17:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think the ear pink looks good, however, if more people agree with you, then I'll work on it. 17:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, dull it a bit, and define the shading on the tail and haunch. 21:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:58, October 12, 2011 (UTC)