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Cedarheart (W) - Tweaked
Blurred the highlights, fixed blurred lineart, and eye wasn't in depth. OA was Ashshadow with a tweak from Atelda, I think. (This is my first tweak so please tell me if I'm doing this right.) 19:12, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around. 01:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:59, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Also, I fixed the heading for you. 02:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't match his description at the moment. It says he's a dark grey tom, and now he looks like a light grey one. :3 When I nominated it, I was told to redo the colour too. 02:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Cinder? 18:20, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I can't. I still have to work on editing a cat without totally redoing it..sorry could someone take over? 01:07, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Changing heading. If another user wants this, they can have it. If not, it'll be archived. 05:22, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 17:58, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid shading and colour. 21:03, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. 20:32, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sky Gatlocke  12:04, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:07, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
I seem to attract solid gray chararts. This definitely isn't my best. Comments? OA was Echomist. Just a shading tweak. 20:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

What needed to be done, and who was the OA? Also, define the ear pink. 21:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:51, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 02:04, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. I'll have it reuploaded by tomorrow. I was in Florida over the weekend. 22:21, March 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Redstar (L) - Redone
Stripes needed to be redone <3 OA was Hawktalon, with a redo by Cloudy, and a tweak by moi. 02:52, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Add some stripes on this <--- flank and some shading at the bottom please! 03:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Ah, to see such a crappy image redone. It fills my heart with joy~ 8D 03:29, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the white muzzle and paws. False reference :3 03:32, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:05, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful~ 8D 20:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. (SO BEAUTIFUL~) Sunny  frost  22:07, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit? c: Sky Seedlit Proxy 22:43, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky, I refuse to thicken the stripes. They're thin and I like them c: 04:24, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink <3  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 15:39, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit dark for a reddish cat...maybe lighten it or use a lighter color, like a light orange? 21:04, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:44, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading. 19:22, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading looks fine. Can you define the earpink just a tiny bit more, though? 19:26, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think it's a little too dark. And I noticed that while most of the shading is tinted red, the leg shading is tinted grey. Fix that along with the haunch shading? 02:03, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:55, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more. 21:22, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not. 02:21, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Then define the tail stripes. 21:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger. 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Not to be very picky, and this might just be me, but the shading is a little bit to dark overall. Could you just lighten it up? Also blur the tail shading too. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  20:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think this might be as ginger as it will get.. x3 But eh. 03:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight/lighter part/thing a bit bigger? 8D Sky Gatlocke  11:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (Alt. SC) ~ Redone
I love this blank. XD And this is probably the only time I'll ever use it for the project, too. D: Anyway, she's a bullseye tabby! I'll take out the white if anyone wants me to, it's based on personal preference. Comments? 22:11, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, the white chest is fine. Blur the stripes on the haunch a bit. Beautiful Shelly <333 23:45 Wed Feb 29

Could you blur the stripes just a tad..<3 Nice job Shelly!! 01:31, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:28, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I was told I could take this over, 'cause Shelly's leaving (D:), so I redid it. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 16:19, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad. Lovely, Elo. <3 21:03, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:54, March 4, 2012 (UTC)'''

Waste in between the legs. And blur the shading a little? 8D Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 03:04, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 21:24, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.)  21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over C:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 21:26, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I attempted to match it to the warrior image's pattern. Don't look at it, it's ugly D:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 22:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <3 Lovely Elo 22:03 Sun Mar 4

Ivytail (RC) (E) - Redone
Original artist was Minnowclaw, with a redo by Scarletwind. The stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 22:21, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

The brown stripe at the end of the tail is very hard-edged, please blur/smudge it. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:26, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Sky Seedlit Proxy 02:17, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:18, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more visable. 01:09, 03, 03, 2012

Reuploaded 17:59, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) - Tweaked
Me gusta :P OAs were Night Shine with a redo by that nerd Ivystripe. Her stripes were unrealistic. I did deleted those off my .xcf file and made brand-spanking new ones! 19:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

<333 Epical. Define the earpink. 19:54, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank ya kindly ^^ 20:00, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a tad? 20:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink, it's far too dark.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    00:55, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Bootiful Ivy! <3 Tone down the "highlights" or such/blur the shading at the edges, mainly the chest and haunch. 01:15, 03, 03, 2012

Sorry Sunny, but I think the earpink looks okay. :3 04:08, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was just told to define the earpink so I'm not touching it  23:45, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

At least blur the edges of it so it doesn't look so sharp edged, Ivy. _-_ 17:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Would this need a greying muzzle, or does that just apply to the alt? Sky Gatlocke  04:45, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (D) - Redone
His stripes were unrealistic. OA was Nightshine, with a redo by Mintstar and a tweak by Leafstorm. 02:58, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge and define the the earpink. Lovely Loonie <3 03:47 Sat Mar 3

Re-uploaded. c: 18:58, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  22:11, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:20, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (KP) ~ Redone
OA was Mistypebble, and I made it to match the warrior image. 04:55, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. 05:15 Sat Mar 3

Re-uploaded. 05:17, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Too epic, Cloudy. <333 19:27, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Stoneh~<3 19:31, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Is it only me, or is it that his eyes look off? He looks like he's dizzy. 20:38, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

That's just how I have the colors placed. I'll switch them around, if you like. 20:42, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 20:49, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the earpink. Sky Gatlocke  12:03, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:23, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match the apprentice and warrior images. OA was Echomist. I did the apprentice one, so I already know the style and the opacity for all the layers and all that, so this wasn't too hard. 00:46, 04, 03, 2012

Lighten the shading a tad. 19:07, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:39, 05, 03, 2012

Tallstar (L) ~ Redone
I might have gone a little over board on the patches o3o OAs were Yai-Girl, Shimmerpool and tweaks by Ivy and Shelly. Comments? 04:42 Sun Mar 4

Oh, dear lord. You expect me to match /that/? Can you dumb it down just a little bit? You kinda went a little over the top...but I /do/ like it. 8D 04:43, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dear god, Mountainheart! You've really outdone yourself this time... Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more on his shaded ear. 04:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye, Sir! Thank you so much 8D I tried blurring the patches but it looked really bad x.x I'd rather not change them. 05:01 Sun Mar 4

Eh, that's fine. What matters is that you tried. xD 05:05, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

* Smacks with jandal* Y U SO GOOD *cough* Anyway, define the neck shading? c: Sky Gatlocke 11:10, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Sky <33 15:50 Sun Mar 4

Darken the shading on his tailtip, it looks pure white. Lovely <33  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 17:24, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Thank you Elo 18:45 Sun Mar 4


 * gasps* How do you do that...? Since the white is furry, do you mind making the black furry too? 21:35, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (A) ~ Redone
OA is Purplemoon, and was redone to match the other images. All colors are from his warrior/kittypet, so I'm not changing them. This includes the ear pink. Oh, guess what? This one's the right size now. xD 05:05, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define tail shading if it's there Sky Gatlocke  12:32, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:24, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (W) ~ Redone
W00t join.me 8D OAs were Bramble and Flamingomom3 I think. Comments? 06:34 Sun Mar 4

kay so, let's get this straight. words cannot describe how amazing this is. just, fyi. k? all I see is that you need to define the earpink, then we need to have my funeral. 07:38, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think you could lighten up the tail shading a tad, but seriously, bloody perfect Sky Gatlocke 11:11, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8DDD Thank you so much 15:49 Sun Mar 4

My my my, O.o wow...a-m-a-z-i-n-g. All I can say is define the tail stripes a tad...20:54, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Cinder <33 21:26 Sun Mar 4

* Drops jaw in horror and amazment* Really, your chararts are so good, they're scaring me. I have no idea how you do it... Maybe slightly blur the earpink at the edges, other than that, perfect. 05:33, 05, 03, 2012

Re-uploaded 8D Thank you DJ <3 05:49 Mon Mar 5

Brightsky (Q) ~ Redone
She was fun to make... ginger cats rock. 8D 03:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I thought the file name said queer xD Blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke 03:30, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little? I still say this is Brightheart is her past life <3  03:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

And define the eye colour. 17:57, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw (KP) - Redone
OA was Dovesong12 and a nose-color change by Ivystripe. Comments? 04:30, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine. I kinda failed at the moss around the collar... But anyway, comments? 04:30, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is just preference, but can you make the moss more like her old image? 04:40, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the collar straighter and/or thicker? 11:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the moss slightly fuzzier (if that's what Ivy meant, disregard this) 11:30, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the collar. 8F <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  22:25, March 5, 2012 (UTC)