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Slightfoot (W) - Declined
Yay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? R a v e n s t e p⋆ 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Better? 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we wait before this is settled? 免得我们还要重做 02:48, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

No- there's no need, considering it wouldn't be done for a long time.

As far as I'm concerned, the chest is smudged with a hard-edged brush 08:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 01:31, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

he needs texture, and on top of that texture theres dull highlights, and it was all smudged with a 1px hard edged brush. 04:05, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

The chest too, it still looks over-blurred 08:53, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using the smudge tool in GIMP? I know you said you used GIMP. Use the smudge tool on the white chest. The earpink looks a lot better! Maybe lighten it a bit more? 13:41, April 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Oh my, the texture didn't fail… Im insanely proud of this  00:42, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink a bit, and make it less neon-y? 00:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

It's not neon at all. It blends well perfectly with the fur. 01:24, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make it more pink than purple please. That's pretty much what Storm was asking, simplified. Just make it a lighter pink on the spectrum. Very nice^^ 13:51, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  17:46, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

I just looked at the apprentice, and I think the patch on his chest is a tiiiiny bit smaller Correct me if I am wrong It could just be my screen though 07:07, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

But that is the apprentice, which is a smaller blank. 13:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the chest white is fine, so im not changing it yet  19:15, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's supposed to be small, so please shrink it. While the apprentice blanks are smaller, the patch of white you have on here is much too big.

Re~Upped Ok  22:55, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

I actually saved the image and zoomed it in to see details, and I think I can see a black outline around the white chest and the bottom whisker. There's also a black hard-eged splotch on his back. I like him! Just try to see what I was talking about (might be just my screen) and blur the hind paws shading slightly^^ good job 14:13, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

That's actually normal "waste", per se. Define the light on the front paw closest? 18:54, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

How is it "waste"? It's on the pelt. 00:36, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Wait, were you talking about on the warrior or apprentice image, Silver? 00:41, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I was talking about this warrior image. It could  be just my screen though 00:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Uh yeah... Here world  02:48, April 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's a lil bit of waste on the top of the nose; also, make the earpink more triangular. 15:35, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I like this. :)  01:16, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's still a somewhat outline around the white, is it just the shading? But the shading really shouldn't just go around the shape >.> 13:49, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Closest to le lineart or towards his body over there? ===>  14:03, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Idk, just around the white chest 11:43, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped 00:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is still quite neon, and its quite small as well. Maybe expand the earpink back out a ways, and dull down the neon-ness. Make it more dull gray-ish pink, but still have a bit of brightness. 20:27, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Sunstream Strongly Dislikes Earpink. 00:36, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Shrink down the white dash on her chest please. And I'll promote you to an apprentice, since you seem to know what you are doing. 11:38, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Yay thank you! :)  13:40, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:42, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  Oh wow your sig Bramble and Burnt's are like...Identical in colors. 02:02, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

lol, sorry, The base is looking dark greenish brown, any chance you could make it blacker? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 02:05, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think it looks perfectly black 02:26, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

that neck shading needs major lightening or something, and the white patch would be included in that shading. 21:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  01:37, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named Slightfoot.warrior.png. The wiki is case sensitive 07:50, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

Eee it wont let me rename it. :T  22:42, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

No, but I can rename it. =P

Blur the shading on the back foot behind the body and the neck and the face. Looking good ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped  15:27, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck area. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:08, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I hope it shows  01:16, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't tell if it's my monitor or not, but it looks like there's a huge blob of black on the neck/muzzle/stomach areas. It starts up on the muzzle, reaches down towards the neck, and then goes on towards the stomach.... It could very well be my monitor, but I'm unsure.

Re~Upped  -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  18:18, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 22:28, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I still see the blob of black. I also think that he's too light- this is more dark gray than black.

I color picked from the apprentice, so the fur is fine, but I shall obliterate the black blob. -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  23:11, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Just because you color picked doesn't necessarily mean you got the actual pelt color. You could've gotten a highlight. When someone says you need to darken it, you darken it. Don't use the 'its fine' thing. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  03:03, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped I have oblitterated the blob with mythical erasers. I used my magical pencil tool to darken. -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  22:56, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

No you didn't. It's still there. It's under the white chest flash and on the muzzle too. Storm &#9835;  23:00, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this has been up more than a month, so I have to decline this.

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Curlfeather (W) - Declined
Yippie! My first PCA charart! If i shoud make her shorthaired, let me know! 15:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Remove some of the shadow from her hind leg where it curls when she sits, as well as the knob of shadow at the back of her tail; it should be a straight shadow line. Also mind blurring the shadow a bit more? And define the light on the front and hind paw closest to us. 15:28, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading to the head as well. 16:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch and add a bit more light to the foreleg closest to us. If you want, there's a shading tutorial here 18:11, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more… triangular? And blur it more It might be just me, it looks a little too neon-y 22:25, April 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, sorry i haven't had a chance to reupload it yet, i'll do it first thing tomorrow. 04:23, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The light could be defined on all the legs tbh 05:09, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  14:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, use a hard edged blur tool at the rate of 100 14:10, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reupped- Yay! 14:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)'''

The shading seems to be... disconnected on the back, and it should be connected, so add some shading there. I hope that wasn't too confusing. Also, can you define the light on the legs? 15:13, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped I didn't change the light on the legs because that is how it looked on the shading placement. 15:30, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking all up his back and in other places too. Define the earpink as well. Sorry if I'm commenting too much. I really like this! 17:14, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad more, please? It's difficult to see. 17:40, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back. If you're gonna add shading to the back and chest fur and tail, add some to the legs please. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 18:54, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped- Just re-did all of the shading. @Icebreeze, Don't worry, you can comment all you want :)  19:48, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, because now the shading is looking... green? I suggest that you shade in black and lower the opacity (you don't have to though) but at least make the shading less greenish. Blur the shading as well. I'm sorry I'm commenting again, you're probably getting really annoyed 20:04, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped Ugh it isint showing up… You are not annoying me don't worry   22:43, April 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lolp at first I thought her name was "Cerealfeather" for some reason :P I see that you're having some problems with the shading, maybe try to make the shading itself smoother, then blue it, if that makes any sense 09:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in and I see some waste around the image. Please remove it. User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:02, April, 20, 2015

Blur and maybe dull the shading a bit more. Also, there's a speck of waste at the very top of the image over the tail 18:51, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Also there's still some shading on her hind leg where it curls when she sits that isn't connected to anything, so if you could get rid of that...? 22:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and then blur the shading more on them 07:52, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, will post soon... 15:50, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  18:47, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still need to get rid of the random shadow. It's like right by her underbelly, where the hind leg curls into it towards the knee (?) 18:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I've promoted you to an apprentice, and changed the file name. Caps are very important for these filenames- it should be File:Curlfeather.warrior.png.

Did you set your shading layer to multiply? It might help the shadows look a little more tinted to the base color and natural. If you just shade with black and lower the opacity, it might throw the color off a tad. It's just a suggestion, you don't have to go with it if you don't want 18:10, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the texture flower with the fur more? Can you lighten the shading? (If Ivy said this, Im sorry I couldn't understand what you said.. sorry  lel 19:42, April 23, 2015 (UTC)

ReUpped  01:41, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it still looks really hard edged 14:21, April 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped  23:42, April 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 14:11, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and lighten the earpink? I can't really see it. 00:53, April 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped Sorry i did it but forgot to reupload. 00:00, April 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading and why is there a black spot on his muzzle? 10:30, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the black spot is shading, and if so, I don't think it should be there. 19:51, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

The color is leaking on ===> this ear, meaning its not all the way to the lineart. 20:25, April 29, 2015 (UTC)

My eyes see no black spot... 00:03, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped I also don't  00:25, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

I don't either. But there is a speck of brightness or something on too of the earpinks shadow...

Could you blur the shading on the neck, the base of the tail, and the front legs just a tiiiny bit, please? 20:05, April 30, 2015 (UTC)

I spy a dark spot on the muzzle. Just below the nose. Unless that was intentional. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:26, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see a dark spot... 02:27, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

There is a dark shaded spot on the muzzle that should not be there since it doesn't go with this lightsource. It's to the left of the whiskers, right below the nose. 09:17, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

I zoomed in to the image, and saw no black spot. 13:37, May 1, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty sure they're talking about the patch of shading shown circled in red.

You're all talking about the spot on the muzzle right? If so, that does need to be removed as the light would be coming from that side. Also, define the earpink and perhaps lighten up the shading a few ticks? 06:28, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

I would make the stripes look more life-like and slim. Flame star22  18:58, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

There aren't any stripes- that's texture.

ReUpped Is this what you ment? 22:49, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more 15:58, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink. it looks gray. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:48, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

ReUpped  15:28, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur shading a lot more on the neck and flank 20:09, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on?

ReUpped *Nods head*  14:53, May 13, 2015 (UTC) Ok, i will next upload this on my new account. 01:11, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck under the head, not above the flank/chest. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  15:45, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, this has been up a month- I have to decline this.

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Lizardtail (W) - Declined
For the love of Castiel, its so hard to copy off your own work -.-. Not to mention I dont have the apprentice's file anymore, but its my same style of texture I always do. I just dont think the colors are right...I dunno. Comment away~ 23:10, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs and the back ear. Also, I can't see the ear pink (it really blends in with the pelt and I only see a tiny line near the middle of the each), so can you possibly define that just a bit?

Gah, I love that texture. I think you should blur the shading on the neck a teeny more, and define the light on the hind leg. Good job Frosty :) 00:53, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! =) 04:46, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Position the earpink more in the middle of the ear, and maybe make it less gray? Also blur it a bit more 17:20, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

The positioning of it is fine. Jayie does it the same way. And it is pink, and many images have been approved with that color. I will wait for a second opinion on smudging it though. Just this once. 17:48, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smudging it wouldn't hurt- it seems a bit too uniform right now as it is

Define the light on the front paw farthest from us 20:18, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

I'll reupload(this and tweaks) on Monday. Sorry I've been sick since Tuesday. 00:17, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 12:42, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading and give the shading going up along the spine some depth.

Still working? 13:38, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

One week without uploads- sorry, Dark, you know the rules. I have to decline this.

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Sneezecloud (W) ~ Declined
what kind of name is sneezecloud 15:07 Sat May 9

A cloud that sneezes. At least not something like Sneezeberry or smth :P Define the light on the legs further from us. I like him! :DDD 15:13, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body 01:52, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't understand why I need to define light on legs that would be in shadow in this pose...? I'll get to the body shading thing right away, though. 06:42 Sun May 10

Maybe define the earpink? I can barely see it. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:08, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

There would be a tiny bit of light on his back paw by his toes in this light source 14:55, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading needs defined overall. 15:22, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Fox already said that, Ravenpelt. Please be careful not to comment what's already been said. 15:43, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I changed what I said. I was abit of a zombie this morning, probably shouldn't be on here when I'm that tired. 16:13, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't need to change the source, it's fine. people have been using it for longer than a lot of people have been here. >.> 05:54, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Declined. Its been a week without uploads. Sorry Berry. 13:41, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

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