Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Sol (Ro) - Redone
Here he is. Redone because his images don't really match and he's been tweaked so many times with new descriptions it's starting to not work. 3:31 Tue Nov 12 2013

Changes here if not showing. 3:32 Tue Nov 12 2013

Can I nudge this for comments or archiving? 14:48 Thu Nov 14 2013

It's amazing! However, I would maybe darken up the shading a tad, if you wish to.

Wow I am so sorry I just saw that right now. I will upload tomorrow yikes. 7:03 Tue Nov 19 2013

Reuploaded. 19:08 Tue Nov 19 2013

Leafpool (Lo) - Redone
Not quite as epic as Papa Leggy's... Redone for consistency, among other things. OA was me. Changes here 02:07, November 14, 2013 (UTC)

Whiten the white? It looks a bit gray compared to the warrior's. 02:08, November 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded here 02:12, November 14, 2013 (UTC)

Do you want the .xcf? 03:19, November 14, 2013 (UTC)


 * Sure  03:23, November 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded changes Thanks for the file, Papa Leggy! 05:13, November 15, 2013 (UTC)

There isn't any white on her neck, and it stops just under her jawline, and doesn't start up again until farther down. The white also ends where the body is covered up by the raised foreleg. The tail stripes are all of the same thickness, and some of the white on the paws, for say, one foot only covers a toe, while the other goes up a bit farther, but it looksall the same here. Correct me if I'm mistaken, though. D: It'd also be nice if you smudged your stripes just a little bit more, like how I described in the email. This looks pretty damn good, though: you did a fabulous job of matching. ^-^ 00:22, November 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded changes here 04:40, November 17, 2013 (UTC)

Remove the texture? There's none on the warrior, and it's throwing off the color.

Re-uploaded I didn't kill the texture completely because it keeps her looking a bit more 3D, but I fiddled with the colors a bit more and lightened the opacity by a lot 05:20, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

No, it should really be removed. Completely. It throws things off and it doesn't match if it's there. If it looks flat without it, then the shading should be adjusted rather than a texture added.

Darken the stripes. The base also seems like it doesn't quite match the other one? Or is that because of the shading?

Re-uploaded Those stripes though.... Changes here 02:50, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe add a highlight over her belly? She looks a bit flat and that would help round her out a little more. Dude this seriously rocks 04:03, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Sol (W) ~ Redone
Oh gawd this was difficult to match. xD Btw the rogue's back is brighter than mine's back because I have shading on the back.

Make the tufted tail rounder, like the rogue? This is amazing, Stoney! *.* 0:26 Sat Nov 16

The chest patch doesn't match the rogue. Can you delete the part that juts out, and then have that white belly thing under the armpit instead? This is a horrible explanation but I hope you under stand ;D 06:58 Tue Nov 19

Turtle Tail (KP) ~ Withdrawn
OA be Skye, tweaked for her  bunny stubby tail. Comments? 04:13, November 16, 2013 (UTC)

Make the tail more floofy. It wouldn't be so slicked-down and curve with the tail's stump, but would, instead, stick out along the curve more in more of a poofball. 06:31, November 17, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine - it'd be like this in this position, since it's a different side altogether. 15:34, November 17, 2013 (UTC)

No, leggy's right.

re-up bleh 20:06, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

re-up waste on a small portion of the tail 21:16, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

re-up some parts were accidently not shaded 22:23, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

The fur on our left side of the tail is oddly spiky, and the bottom is too flat. Expand the canvas so it can curve more naturally.

How should I expand it? Top or bottom? 23:46, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

re-up figured out 00:32, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps add a few more locks of fur to our left, right along the curve? It looks a bit clumpy the way it is currently. 04:04, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Crop the image, please. ^^ There's tons of extra space.

The locks on the outer curve of the tail cut into where the tail bones/muscles/whatever is In a cat. 07:00 Tue Nov 19

I can't deal with this image anymore - the tail is annoying to tweak on this blank due to its angle and the fact that it doesn't match the rogue, in my opinion, so I'm withdrawing. I wish good luck to anybody who takes over on this image. 19:33, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Leafstar (L) - Redone
If changes aren't showing. Comments?

I can't really see much cream, can you add more by any chance?

There's plenty honestly. She's about half cream and half brown right now.

Beautiful! I wish I could do textures like you can. If you don't want to add more cream, then can you define both colors, because I'm having trouble telling one color fron the other (besides the stripes). 21:26, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

Can you maybe define the brown-ness? (sorry, bad wording) 21:48 Mon Nov 18

Hawk, Bluestar just said basically the same thing as you with different wording, no need to repeat. And while I'd personally like to make the brown and cream more different, this was about as different as they could get without the cream being pretty much an off white, or the brown no longer being pale like the description says. Besides, this is basically a torbie, and torbies don't always have their patches super defined.

Oh, whoops. Sorry about that, Paleh. Misunderstanding, is all. Anyways, this is amazing! 0:02 Tue Nov 19

Thistlepaw (P3) ~ Withdrawn
tweaked to darken shading-  latest Oa was Shelly. 18:11, November 17, 2013 (UTC)

She looks really dark for a white cat.

Reups 19:01, November 17, 2013 (UTC)

Still a little too dark, imho.

Reups this should do the trick 08:31, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading a little bit. 04:05, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Make the legs less flat? Choose the fuzziest brush and make it like, 5 pixels and run it right down the leg, that should do the trick. Blur minimally. Cuteee ^-^ 07:05 Tue Nov 19

Withdrawn since this is such a pain in butt without the file and I want to work on something else. 19:46, November 19, 2013 (UTC)

Leafstar (W) - Redone
Everything matches the leader. Last OA was me. Redone for multiple reasons. Comments?

Do you think there's a way you can make the cream a bit more defined without changing the color? If not then that's fine this looks amazing. 19:09 Tue Nov 19 2013