Warriors Wiki talk:World

Fox - Silver Nomination
Looks good to me. Comments? 21:00, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

The top paragraph could use a few citations. 21:10, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Relations to cats and Relations to Twolegs could also use citations. Foxes also appear/are mentioned in Into the Wild, Forest of Secrets, The Darkest Hour, etc. I'll try to get a full list soon. 20:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Animal articles need a completed, cited, description section, according to []. This should be separate from the introduction. 17:00, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. I'll go through all my books I have that I can remember that have incidents with foxes and see if I can add more citations. 02:30, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I looked all over the article, and it looks great to me! 19:47, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Added citations to the description. 14:39, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, looks good! Except there has to be a whole new section for description, just like there's a section for the Relations to Clan cats section and Relation to Twolegs section. 17:04, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Should I add it under the template? 15:22, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm... No, don't. The Description shouldn't give away anything about the plot. 23:38, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, it doesn't. Should I just keep it like this? 21:54, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, add a Description Section, but put the spoiler warning after it. 23:49, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Everything is basically stated in the description and the relations topics. Should I shorten the top paragraph (introduction) and add more to the description section? 22:23, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, good idea. Keep this sentence: Foxes are medium sized, dog-like omnivores that live in dens, in woodland and shrubland. And put everything else in the description. 22:49, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 16:55, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Good job! Now fill up the history, and it'll be perfect! I'll try to help if I have spare time. 20:12, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Alright 15:11, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add a few references to the Relation to Twolegs section? 19:06, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm, are you stil working on this? It's been 12 days since you last commented, and if you don't respond in five days, this will be archived. 22:39, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Badger - Silver Nomination
I'm working on expanding the history and relationship to cats. I'm just nominating it now. 18:16, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is it necessary to cite every sentence with the same reference in the Description section? It seems unnecessary to me, but other users do it, too. 18:22, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrel's got a point. If it's all from the same source, then why not just cite it at the end of the paragraph? I could understand if they were in different parts of the article, but they're not. 03:02, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

If its possible, you could also use a different book or source to cite it from; other than that, though, great work! 03:28, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly mention Midnight in the relation to cats section, as it is very important to the plot of the second series. 21:03, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

I see the references are now fixed. I also agree with Specklestream. Add Midnight in very briefly in the Relations to Clan Cats section. 18:49, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Since it is fixed and there have been no other comments, CBV? 22:59, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 20:38, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

This will now be continued until Moonflight expands the History. 19:54, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Forest of Secrets and Firestar's Quest if you can. 21:50, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Sorry for appearing dead. I've been busy. :) 18:42, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok, you don't appear dead now. 23:10, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Twoleg Kit ~ Silver Nomination
I know it needs work, so this is more like a reservation. 21:55, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it does. XD 22:24, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the "General" section if you haven't been thinking 'bout it. 23:02, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for neglecting this a lot. I'll start fixing it up more. 21:01, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand the "Relation to Clan Cats" a bit more? :3 04:07, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I expanded it a bit more. xD 18:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It needs a Description section. 01:34, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Does a Twoleg Kit count as an animal? I didn't know that... 18:35, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Twoleg doesn't have a Description Section. 18:38, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, then it needs a General section. :P 19:48, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Done, but its short, since Twoleg kits are rarely seen. 19:24, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! CBV? 03:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Did you check all books? I remember Twoleg Kits being mentioned e.g. in Firestar's Quest, when Fire+Sand are passing some hotel before the storm (Chapter 11), when some Twoleg kits try to capture them (Chapter 14), and some are seen swimming in the river (Chapter 16).

Also, the SkyClan's Destiny should be moved to the Super Editions, instead of the manga section.

Kind regards, 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, really? Oops, I'll check again. 17:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Place of No Stars - Silver Nomination
I think it looks good. I went through and expanded the history a bit, and overall it looks fine to me. Comments? 15:54, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm guessing this is a Silver Nomination? :P Looks good! It needs a Terreitory section, though. 23:42, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah xD Alright, I'll add it in 23:54, July 31, 2011 (UTC) Wait, wouldn't the territory section fall under Description? 22:15, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Apparently not, according to this: Guidelines. You can have a little territory section since there aren't any major landmarks in the Dark Forest. Just put in stuff about how it's all dark and no sunlight ever reaches it. 23:12, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Added. 21:04, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 21:49, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

References, references, and references. XD Add some more in! :P 20:53, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

The Description section indeed lacks some references. 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm, are you still working on this? It's been 15 days since you last commented on this. If there are no comments in 5 days, this will be archived. 23:46, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Deaths
I was thinking it would be nice to have a page with a complete list of deaths like the nursery has a complete list of births. Is this necessary? If so, which page should we put it on? 00:46, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think it would merge with the Timeline. Are we going to have a separate page, or maybe merge it with StarClan or just keep it on the timeline? 00:47, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think we should add it onto StarClan/Dark Forest but only the ones that we actually know what book they went there in (eg. Yellowfang, Bluestar, Lionheart, Hawkfrost, Feathertail)  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER The Peace is Perfect☯  06:56, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, OwlxGlitter. If we only accounted for the ones that we knew where they ended up, our list wouldn't be so complete. I think we should merge it in with the timeline then. My only concern with that is that the list isn't so complete right now. We can all work on adding the deaths in. 22:30, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, lets merge it with the timeline. 18:21, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

There was an idea here, but it was scrapped because there were no contributors to work on it - maybe it's time to pick it up?

Alternatively, we can list them on the Detailed Events Timeline. Not on the main timeline though - that is intended to list only the births / deaths of more important characters (see consensus here).

Kind regards, 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

We could list them on the Detailed Timeline, but I like the idea of having the name of the cat, the age, and the cause (like in the table Helix suggested in the pervious archive). Would we be able to fit that all in the detailed timeline? 17:51, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

What Can I do?
Hello all! I was wondering if anyone had ideas on what I could do. I haven't been on in a while and for that I apoligize. Thanks! ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 18:46, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, to start, you don't have to apologize. We can all go inactive in our busy lives. =) You can start nominationg characters again. Other things you can do is expand the articles on our stub list or improve the articles in our Concerns list. If you have any other specific questions, all you have to do is ask! 22:36, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nominating world articles, not characters. xD Also, work on the new content drive. Of course, also see the Guidelines. 18:13, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I knew that. XD 23:01, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

New Content Drive
Everyone, Prey is our new content drive. Please work on it. 18:44, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I've been blank for most of last month so I'm sorry if this has already been discussed, but are we going to make a template for prey as we did with medicine? :) 18:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I was on vacation of half of last month, too, so I'm not really sure what the decision was, but I'm pretty sure we are going to make a template. 18:50, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, we are going to make a template. I suggest the template being modeled after Medicine but including thse topics instead: Appearance, Species, three in-depth book mentions, and a list of other book mentions. 22:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. I'll create it now, if you want. 20:43, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Icestorm, but I already made one. :P See here. Is it ok? I think that on the Other Book Mentions place, we can have a list of the book mentions, and below the template, we can do the three in-depth mentions in bullet points. 21:18, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright! I think that's pretty good, should we start using it? 21:33, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll go ahead and make the template. 22:16, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Template made. See here: Template:Prey. Is the image too small? Can we find images of prey that are 150x150? 22:26, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, it isn't too small. We might not be able too, we'll find some bigger, but keep in mind we can shrink it. 17:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Right. So I'll go ahead and itt it to the article if no one has any objections? 19:47, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Have we uploaded all the pictures for the prey items? If not, I know a few good pictures that could be used. And are we allowed to use images from Wikipedia, since I'm sure they're fair use as well. 21:11, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

I added in all the templates, added pictures, and now I'm going to start expanding! Every member is now free to work on expanding and adding references. 20:23, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Gathering
I was thinking, should we have a list of all the Gatherings on this page and next to it say what information was revealed from other Clans? We could also write in decisions made at the Gatherings. Is this necessary? I think it would be a good idea, but I want to get some more opinions first. 18:58, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

It sounds like a good idea, but how would we seperate each gathering. We can do it by book, but then what? Do "first gathering, second gathering..." It can get pretty confusing that way plus a hassle if there was a gathering unaccounted for. Plus there's a lot of "Prey is running well" gatherings as in no information is revealed. 19:03, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

In most gatherings, there's always some info revealed like when elders die or kits are born. I thought that we could separate the gatherings by book and by season. The Events Timeline would be useful here. 19:34, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, that's a good idea. We could include what the leaders informed at each Gathering maybe? And maybe seperate the headings by book/series. Sounds good to me. 20:47, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Finally! I'm glad someone agrees! :P If we do end up working on this idea, should we make a template for it? I think it would be better listed out, though. 21:12, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think we should make it like the cliffnotes, except...for Gatherings. I doubt that we need to make a whole template for it. 18:08, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Cliffnotes would be ok. I was thinking of the headings, but I guess we could do it either way. 19:44, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

So what does everyone else think? Cliffnotes or headings? Advantages for cliffnotes are that information can be listed briefly organized. Disadvantages are that it might take up too much room to do a heading for every single Gathering. Advantages of headings are not taking up too much room and making it easier to read, and disadvantages are that it might not be as organized. 03:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I vote for cliffnotes. :D 17:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I vote for headings. =D 01:59, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Atelda: what about sorting them according to year / month (sort of like the Events Timeline list)? There is one per month, and it's easy to guess which month is it from the weather's description, or comparing with the previous / next Gathering. 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree this is a good idea. I'm confused on what headings are? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:19, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Headings are the... hmm. Hard to explain. If you go to Sheer Path Beside Waterfall, you'll see in the contents that History is heading 1 and the sub heading 1.1, is In the New Prophecy Series. The sub sub heading for that (1.1.1) is Dawn. Then it goes back to 1.2 In the PO3 series... etc. Each of those are a different type of heading the biggest one, the History, Family, Quotes and References are the Heading type 2. The next biggest one is Headings type 3, and so on. That wasn't a very good description, as I fail at describing things, but I hope you understood! ;) 18:47, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Natural Disasters ~ Silver Nomination
I know it needs lots of references, but I added in some history and expanded it. 18:48, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it needs references. XD See if you can look through the books for mentions of any other natural disasters. 19:42, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps flesh out the Bluestar's Prophecy section some? :3 05:01, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well, this is for major disasters, and the extremely minor ones like rain don't count, so thats all there is. I tried to expand BP, but I can't really flesh it out any more. 17:05, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand the introduction? It doesn't have to be that much longer, just two or three more sentences would be nice. 01:57, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 20:27, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Added Citations, expanded history. Anything else? 21:14, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

One more citation to the introduction? Not needed, of course, but it would be nice. ;) Maybe you can also find another citation for drought. For the references, you might want to put an actual page number rather than saying page Littlecloud's herbs freeze, or page Twolegs chop down the forest. 03:02, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think another citation for drought is needed, and I'll fix the references. 15:41, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I think there's nothing else that needs to be changed, so, CBV? 17:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:58, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Prey- Eagles
Hi, I'm not part of this project or anything, I just felt I should put a suggestion out there to help. I noticed on the Prey page you guys put up a picture of a bald eagle under eagles. I think you should post one of a golden eagle instead, as golden eagles are much more common in Europe. Just a thought, Shelly out. 21:34, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it really matters, since all eagles still count as eagles. Its still a good suggestion, but I don't think we need to be that specific. :P 23:00, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

BloodClan ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded it, and added all the references. Comments? 19:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the Ravenpaw's Path Series. 20:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 20:33, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think there's anything else. Good job! 22:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! This will be CBVed...once more votes start? xD 22:41, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The first three sections in the History are written in past tense. These should be rewritten in present tense.

Also, can something be added about their territory? I remember a description of Scourge's den in The Darkest Hour, and some park in Violet's short-story.

Kind regards, 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job Mistystar! ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 17:30, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar, as Helix already pointed out a few flaws in the article, it would be contradictory for you to say she did a nice job on the article. You should only give compliments after all flaws are fixed. Thanks, 18:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

RiverClan ~ Silver Nomination
I added an Introduction, Description, and Territory section. I also expanded all history and added another link to the See Also section. Comments? 18:50, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I found a name mistake, but I fixed it :). Could you expand Outcast, Eclipse, and Long Shadows? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:24, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded Outcast, but RiverClan is hardly mentioned because the book is all about the journey to the mountains. I couldn't expand Eclipse or Long Shadows because once again, RiverClan is hardly mentioned. Anything else? 18:42, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

May I join?
Hey, chinapro2000 here. Wondering if I can join? Looks fun! :) Chinapro says.... you need to give her a cookie.....NOW.  13:08, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! Be sure to read the Guidelines before nominating anything! I'll add you in shortly. 18:37, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yay. Silver's here!

WindClan
Like I did with RiverClan, I will be making heavy edits on this article as well, so when I am editing it, please don't edit it so I can avoid an edit conflict. However, after I am done editing this page for a certain amount of time, all members are free to continue the work being done. 19:24, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Squirrelflame. Keep up the good work :) ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:28, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice ~ Silver Nomination
I believe it's ready. Some references have to be added, other than that, comments?  ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

A lot of references need to be added, but other then that, it looks great! 05:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It needs a short spoiler-free introduction. Keep a few sentences but add everything else into a Description section. The Tasks section has to after that with a type 2 heading instead of type 3. Assesment should be a type 3 heading under that. Then you have to have a special cases section which is applicable here because Crookedkit had to stay a kit for a while before becomeing apprenticed, and Swiftpaw, Brightpaw and others had to stay warriors for a while. All in all, there's a lot of special cases to add in. 22:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can I Join?
Can I please join project world? Stoneclaw33

Of course! Make sure to read the Guidelines and I'm sure you'll be a valuable member of this project. I'll add you in. 22:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)