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Unknown Residents Blanks ~ For Approval
These were fun! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:48, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

I'll fix the other image on my next upload and thicken the lineart. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:52, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

On the shorthaired blank, perhaps just round off the tail tip? or make the fur tips on the tailtip pointier, it doesn't look quite right the way it is.

Maybe make the -> front paw a little more pronounced? Not exactly sure on how it would look but I think it should be sticking out a little more at that angle. I'm assuming that it looks the same on the shorthaired blank so fix it on both blanks. 03:37, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Am I the only one who just sees a gray box when it comes to the short-furred blank?

You're not, but i commented saying I'll fix it on my next upload. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:45, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

For the head, can you lengthen the bottom a bit and make more of a mouth, and then the chin? 07:51, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

It's actually the muzzle itself. I just had the cat look down, so the chin, I don't think, is there. It's the top of the muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:55, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart

I think the right (our right) front leg is thinner than the left one. Even them out? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:48, January 11, 2018 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I'll fix the thickened lineart later and add fur to the elbow. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:51, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

is it possible to maybe make the longhair tails a bit fluffier since theyre supposed to be longhaired after all 07:31, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe lengthen the extended paw?

What do you mean lengthen? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 17:44, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Make the leg longer; right now it kind of looks disproportionate. (but that could be just me)

Is the front leg on our right suppose to be bent or straight? I'm thinking bent. If so cats tend to stick their elbows up almost into their ribcage like this. So a cat crouching like that would have the elbow inside the lines that make the body. This would also help with how the leg looks a little shorter than the rest. 16:35 Tue Jan 16 2018 16:35, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make the back on the long-haired blank more fluffy? 21:06, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Crop the shorthair blank to the lineart (I think the longhair already is) Also there's a line on <- front leg near the head that I don't think is supposed to be there

The right (our right) front leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

I haven't forgotten about this! I shall tweak them on my next upload later! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:14, January 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:32, January 22, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the -> back leg on the short-haired blank more bent than the long-haired blank's? If that's the case, could you make the long-haired blank's leg more like the short-haired blank? 20:43, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

They're the same thing, it's just fluffy on the long-haired blank. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:03, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the line I commented about earlier is still there, so I'll circle it, as well as a few other lines. I can see that the lines are all in the whisker area, but they don't seem to connect anywhere on the head, which is why I think they're out of place, and they aren't on the shorthair, but they don't look like fluff. And finally, the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

the front of the hind leg also looks a little thin around the lineart, as does the all paws. 05:03, January 27, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo had said they were out of town, and experiencing some family issues. I don't think they've returned yet, but even if the Still Working goes by 24 hours, it shouldn't be declined, because it wouldn't be fair to Cosmo if she's not here to work on it. <span style="">02:29, 2/03/2018

Blanks are exempt from the one week/one month ruling. These won't be delcined, and Cosmo came to me and let me know about her activity. These will stay up.

I am home from out of town, but still family issues are going on and now my computer in sai isn't letting me save any files for some reason, even though I shut it down and stuff. I'm still trying to get back on and tweak these blanks, but I'm sorry for the inactivity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

It's all good, Cosmo. Thanks for updating us!

I should be uploading in the next day or two! Hopefully by saturday or tomorrow night. Sorry about not uploading in a while. Also, i got a new tablet for desktop, so that's good. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:44, February 9, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps thicken the lines on the ears and back a little bit? It might just be my eyes, but it seems a bit thin. <span style="">18:03 Sun Feb 11

Re-uploaded. WOO! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:42, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the lines around -> whiskers/leg look kind of messy on the shorthair, and a little messy on <- whiskers/fluff on longhair. The longhair's tail is at a different angle than the shorthair's, and my only other concern is that the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

Could you make the ears just a little more pointed? 20:58, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

idiot me above said the wrong leg: right (our right) back leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

The left front leg looks too thin. Even with the angle difference, the front legs should still carry the same weight, if that makes sense. I can give a red line if it would make what I mean clearer. <span style="">12:40 Thu Mar 1

maybe make the fluffy bits on the side of the face of the longhaired a bit smaller, like right now they seem a lil big if u know what I mean? not reducing it, though. 18:42, March 1, 2018 (UTC)

Are you still working Cosmo? Not going to decline this, just checking on ya.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:57, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, I am. Things been shitty lately. But they should be uploaded again soon... <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:41, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:49, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

I'm gonna change the hind leg again! :u Any redlines will help too. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:45, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

I think you should make the line on the <= ear disconnect from the outline, so it doesn't look too thin, if you know what I mean. Just a bit similar to the other ear. And maybe alter the middle tuft on the long-haired tailtip a little? It could be just me, but it looks almost like another paw. I love this blank so much ughhh ><!!

These are turning out very nice! Maybe make the lineart on bottoms of the left front paw and back paws a tiny bit thicker? 22:31, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

anything happening w these? 22:09, April 12, 2018 (UTC)

Heck if I know

Ivypool (Q) ~ For Approval
00:57, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Very nice! You need the sliced ears. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:58, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Her eye color doesn't seem to match the others, also define eye depth.

Reuploaded Thanks, Cosmo! Also, I put an overlay layer on my eye color so I deleted that. Is this better? And just realized I did the wrong siggie oops. 1:10, 4/10/2018 ​

she's missing the silver on her front leg. 01:24, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a bit smoother on the other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:03, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:46, 4/10/2018 ​

Could you blur the stripes a little bit more and smooth out the shading? 22:36, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:42, 4/10/2018

I feel like the silver on the front leg should be larger, in comparison to the kit and warrior images. 18:17, April 11, 2018 (UTC)​

Reuploaded Btw the patch is lighter on the right side because of highlights. I could lighten them if you guys want. 1:47, 4/12/2018

I'm just curious, why are her eyes no longer dark blue despite her page saying so? Anyway, would you mind darkening the tint of the shading by a bit? The blue seems a bit bright. This looks great, btw!!

Reuploaded 00:01, 4/15/2018 ​

CBA? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:39, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to interrupt CBA, but there's leaking shading near the <-- hind leg on the stomach, and near the --> front leg. <span style="">05:29, 4/15/2018

Reuploaded 13:14, 4/15/2018

It might be my screen, but it looks like there's a little splotch of white where shading should be on the belly. 13:18, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:24, 4/15/2018

There's leaking shading on the head <span style="">18:06, 4/15/2018

Define the shading on the legs a tad and the tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:06, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

is it possible to make the eyes look bluer? I don't know if its my screen or not but I'm having trouble telling what colour they are. 21:49, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Finleap (W) ~ CBA
All colors from the other images. Comments? 19:34, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the light on his little stub of a tail? I was hoping you'd be able to repost this. 8D

Reuploaded. Thanks. 19:50, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 23:43, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:53, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

can you soften the pale parts a little 01:10, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add some shading to the head some? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:40, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo there is shading on the head. Do you mean the forehead between the ears or...? <span style="">10:30, 4/15/2018

Between the ears, I guess... <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 13:23, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:31, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 01:57, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Velvet (VS) (Lo) ~ For Approval
hi uploading from my phone so won’t be able to reup until Monday but dumping this here

Define the shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:49, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded finally got my laptop back

Define the shading on the legs and face? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 16:15, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Can I get a second opinion on that? I think it'd defined enough from the last upload, and if I do it too much more it'll look too sharp.

It looks defined enough to me. 02:01, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define it a little on --> front leg? Disregard this if it gets shot down. <span style="">13:34, 4/17/2018

Reuploaded

Flipkit (K) - CBA
Hi everyone this is my baby kitty Gus Gus Flipkit. 21:42, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading a tad?

Reups 00:24, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:04, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Reups There's a dorsal stripe there on the tail, so that could make the shading harder to see idk 23:03, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Spotkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Kit blanks will be the end of me ;-;

Define the shading on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:50, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the head 00:12, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-ups

Probably gonna get shot for this, but could you define the ear pink just a little bit? I'm having some issues making it out from the pelt color. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">14:37, 4/15/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​ <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">14:37, 4/15/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

Re-ups Nobody shoots Jayce

I think the shading on the back paw should be on the other side, since the legs and tail depict the light coming from <--- that side 22:50, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Define the head shading please. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:19, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

@Vec, I used this shadow placement on almost all my kit images, and it wouldn't make sense if there's light on the paw from underneath the body, so I either keep it this way and consider the light from top left around the kitten, or I cover the paw completely in shadow. @Ermine, the shading (including the head) is already on 87%, and I can very clearly see shading on the => side of the head - it's not that I don't want to listen but I really can't define it any further. Maybe it's just hard to make out with the stripes? If someone can give me tips on how to define it, that'd be very appreciated.

I honestly think it's just the stripes. The shading looks good as it is, and I'm not sure you need to change it. It'll be your choice in this case, I'd say.

Thriftkit (K) - For Approval
i might change the eye color. 23:04, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

Cute! Define shading?

Re-uploaded. 23:19, April 14, 2018 (UTC)

I don't know if it's my screen, but would you be able to make her a tiny bit darker? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:37, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:42, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

This looks a little purple-tinted. <span style="">10:32, 4/15/2018

As long as it's not super obviously purple, I'd say it's fine, but if someone could give me a second opinion, that'd be great. 13:15, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Looks dark gray to me. Cinderheart's images are tinted as well, I do believe. I think in this case, it's fine. (fun fact: Cloudstar's leader image is tinted purple =O)

Danng this is THE cutest thing I've ever seen omg :O It might be my eyes or my screen, but the ear pinks on each ear looks like two different shades? The => ear seems to be more saturated pink.

Re-uploaded. <3 23:32, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the ear pink? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:03, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:07, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading a bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 20:14, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:45, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Shellpaw (Kit alt) ~ For Approval
niconiconii

Maybe smooth out the white around the face and head? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:46, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

I thought unless tortoiseshells are described with white it can't be added? <span style="">04:49, 4/15/2018

its not white, it's cream, which should be acceptable i think?

Oh yeah, that's true.^^ <span style="">05:26, 4/15/2018

Re-uploaded I'm not sure though, bc I remember someone was told to remove cream on a tortie cat (could be my false memory though). I'll see what others have to say about this

Cream isn't white and can be part of a tortie's coloring. It's fine and can stay.

CBA? this is so cute! 13:28, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to break the CBA, but could you define the shading on the legs and tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 20:15, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Plumpaw (TC) (App) ~ For Approval
<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:46, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Might just be my screen.. but this looks a little more brown-and-ginger than black-and-ginger. <span style="">10:31, 4/15/2018

I got the colors from the kit and it's probably the shDing too.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 12:13, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

On my screen he looks black and orange

She looks black-and-ginger to me. It's probably just shading, or different color calibrations between screens. Not sure you'd really need to change the color at all, honestly. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">14:35, 4/15/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

Define the shading on the paws furthest away from us? 23:04, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

I think it would be hard to do it without making them look pitch black. They're already dark as is. Second opinion maybe? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:25, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

I think it looks all right. I love this tortie pattern. 02:45, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Mistcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
and in the beginning the universe said "let there be carpal tunnel". 19:01, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

..now that.... is fluffy. Smooth the shading in --> ear? There's some hard-edged pixels I'm seeing. <span style="">19:03, 4/15/2018

reuploaded 20:29, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe add some more spikes to <-- side of the head and maybe some on --> shoulder? I love these spikes man, lol. Maybe define the shading on the tail, too?

define shading on the back --

reuploaded I can't add more head spikes without it looking stupid. 21:37, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the head a bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 20:13, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Bristlekit (TC) (K) - For Approval
Kit shading is hard ;)  ErmineGlow (talk) 19:54, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Cute! Define shading? Looks like part of it's kind of shadowy.

Reups Thank you! Also, I have uploaded this under the wrong name, so if someone could rename it to the correct one, I'd like that. ErmineGlow (talk) 20:05, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light source, I can't tell which direction it's coming from. 23:50, April 15, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the ear pink? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:04, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

define eye depth and nose pink? --

For light source references, I suggest looking at this: http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Shading_Placement.tutorial.png

Image has been renamed to File:Bristlekit (TC).kit.png, please continue uploading under that

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:17, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail. 23:14, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

yeah boi, this is much better! anyways, uh, smooth the ear pink, it looks very rough. also, is there meant to be shading on the < front leg or am i seeing things? because with this light source you've got going on i don't think you should have it. --

Smooth the shading, it's looking blotchy in some spots. 02:48, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink more? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:25, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:20, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Tree (MCA) ~ For Approval
hi okay imma make like a tree and leaf< /shot>

I think Bluestar said his ears were darker too. Add some shading underneath his chin starting to the chest? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:39, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

re-up I dunno, Bluestar posted the hex codes here and I'm pretty sure I got them all correct. Second opinion?

He does have darker ears, as well as an M shape on the forehead, and more tail stripes (10, including tail-tip). 02:00, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

re-up may tweak those tail stripes

Birchbark (Star) - For Approval
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Can you add some of the lighter parts on the tail and on his legs, the lighter parts only show in the front, not the back. And maybe lighten the shading some? And maybe add some shading to --> part of the shoulder? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 16:14, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Fringepaw (Alt A) - For Approval
Not sure I like this.

Could you define the shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:23, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Kinda took inspiration from Puddleshine on this one. I love what Jayie did, so I want to try something similar.

Looks nice! Could you define the shading agin to darken it some? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 20:15, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Brindlewing (W) - For Approval
May fix this up a little later. 23:58, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs and maybe extend the belly shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:23, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:13, April 17, 2018 (UTC)