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Rainleap (Star) ~ For Approval
Long overdue... because no one wanted hurr :3 23:14, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the faces stripes a bit more and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more? 23:53, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to be difficult, but I purposely matched Rainleap's face stripes, though they may be a little dark, to their blurring. If anything, I'd say they need to be blurred more. I'll change them if someone else says something :3 05:21, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

They're a touch too blurred and a little too dark. 16:53, April 13, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like pizza.

I think the chest and that little spot of shading between her chin and her shoulder could be blurred a bit. Nice! 01:26, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

I think her stripes may be just a little too dark. 03:25, 04/15/2013

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad? 22:18, April 17, 2013 (UTC)

Iight, will be uploading when I can find time! :( seriously teachers need to know we like things other than school really 02:10, April 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:26, April 19, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to rush you guys, but it's been over 24 hours without comment and I really wanted to get in a good starclan kit image when the blanks come out, so critique? 05:57, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a little over-smudged at the ends, perhaps smudge them a tiny bit? 06:02 Sun Apr 21

Sorry Bloo, but you made absolutely no sense to m XD 05:43, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant over-blurred at the ends. 05:50 Mon Apr 22

User's a COPPA violation and got banned. This is declined. Anyone who wants to take over and work on it may do so.

I'll take over. 01:20, 04/24/2013

Re-uploaded Ehh.. Not sure I like how the shading turned out. :\ 01:35, 04/24/2013

Perhaps define the shading on the tail? 07:10 Wed Apr 24

I personally thing the tail shading is fine, but perhaps ass some shading to the upper arm on <--this side? 07:12 Wed Apr 24

Re-uploaded Added some shading on the arm. Personally, I think the tail shading is fine. 12:48, 04/24/2013

Blur the haunch shading, and perhaps make the stripes match more by blurring them a bit? The warrior's stripes look a bit softer than this. Nice work! Bb un   legs  18:15, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit darker on the warrior. 22:48, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

The belly shading looks like it should be smudged and blurred in a little bit more. Nice job! --Sea Light (talk) 16:36, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Her shoulder that is facing us is a bit flat, could you add some shading to the curve of the shoulder that is near her chest? Also, I think the face stripes on her forehead should come down a little further, to match the warrior. Beautiful! 22:57, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 03:19, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Blossomkit (Star) - For Approval
First white cat. Comments? 21:17, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC).star.png. 21:21, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

How? It won't let me. 21:28, April 21, 2013 (UTC)



Does it make sense taht i made more nicely? Spaniel78CP (talk) 22:23, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Span, it doesn't matter;Sorrel reserved it first, the image is her's. Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 22:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

In all honesty, I prefer Sorrel's image ouo;; Anyways, Sorrel, this is beautiful! It seems that there's a background or something outside the image. Couldja erase that? -- Echo Harkness   "I was just saying hello!" 23:22, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel, just re-upload it as a new file and mark the old one for deletion. 03:27, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Echo, she can't make her background transparent. Sorrel, if you'd like, once your image is approved, I can take care of that for you~

'Kay, sorry, but for what infinite reason can Sorrel not make the background transparent? It's a simple process that takes no more than a few minutes and is super easy to learn. It's ridiculous that she cannot make a transparent background considering the art she has done. I honestly do not think that this should be approved with the background like that. She needs to learn how to do it herself, it's not that hard. Add some depth to the eyes and define the tail shading a bit. 03:47, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

'teldy, it's Pixlr, not her. ._. It often does that for people. I've had that issue myself, honestly. No need to get snippy about it.

'Reuploaded' Alright, teldy. It's not my fault. Pixlr dosen't let me save so I have to copy paste it. This is a permanant problem, I'm afraid - so thank you, kelsey, do make it transparent once its approved. I've stated this background problem many times. >.< Renamed, eye depth and tail defined. 14:41, April 22, 2013 (UTC)


 * Yeah, no, sorry. I do not accept that excuse. Even paint has the ability to make something transparent. In fact, there are several other ways to solve this problem than relying on someone else to complete the job for you. It's fine if it's just a first and you're experimenting with digital art, but considering how far you come, there really is no excuse for you not to be able to find a way to make something transparent. Go talk to multiple artists, look it up on youtube, convert to another digital art program, etc. There are copious more ways to approach this situation than sitting there and begging for help with one of the simple steps of making digital art. 22:08, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Its no excuse! I'm serious! And I am not begging. 22:21, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel, if you need any help with Pixlr, I can help you, I've been using that program for quite awhile now, Anyways define the unshaded parts on the tail. Also, Echo please do not say that you prefer one image over another, I find that very rude, and it would lower my self-esteem if that was said to myself. owo 22:43, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not doubting that Pixlr doesn't work for you with transparency, I use the diction of "excuse" as an expression of curiosity as to why you have not figured out an alternative method. You said you copy and paste the image. On to what? MS Paint? Because there are ways to do transparency on MS Paint. Or ask someone else who does Pixlr like Duck offered, in fact on the "front page" of PCA where the mentor program is, it shows you specific people who use Pixlr and want to help other users. You don't need to be an apprentice to go ask a mentor for help. That's why they're there, as a reference for specific people (apprentices) and for anyone who's having a bit of difficulty with something. The fact of the matter is that I do not want to see you be held back from this one simple obstacle. 23:12, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define eye depth and tint shading because it looks a little gray. No need to attack sorrel for sorrel's pixlr's issue, this is an easy problem to fix if you simply tell her how. Just download gimp here, paste the image into the gray screen with the fox in the background (don't hit new, just paste into the window), use the paint bucket with a bright unused color to fill in the background. Hit the background with the tool with the three colored boxes and the pointer finger and the background should be outlined with dashed lines. hit delete and save the image, tadaa. Everyone okay? yay. you're welcome. ;P 01:13, April 23, 2013 (UTC)


 * Except not everyone can download GIMP, nor does everyone want to. 01:19, April 23, 2013 (UTC)


 * How do we know sorrel isn't willing to download GIMP? Before we try to come to conclusions, let's see what Sorrel is willing to do. 02:24, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

I think Sorrel's already said something about not being able to download GIMP? Anyways, can we shift the focus back to the image, please? Is the entire tail supposed to be in shadow, Sorrel? If not, could you possibly add a highlight or two? Or just erase some shading; either method will work.

Reuploaded Teldy, when you say 'ms paint' do you mean this? 14:56, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made the shading less grey a bit more. 15:01, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Yep. 20:11, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Define where the shading is exactly. 22:49, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:42, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

I'm still having trouble picking out the shading from the base. 21:16, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, Sorrelflower, that is what I mean by MS Paint. The shading is a bit blotchy right now, the earpink could be a bit more noticeable and the fur in the ear could be a bit more blurred. 21:45, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded then how do I make it transparent? 16:06, April 26, 2013 (UTC)


 * Paste the image on paint, and then paste the lineart of the cat onto paint in another area other than where your charart is. Then, where there are the shapes, choose the rectangle one, change your color to gray (or another color other than black) and then select the lineart by drawing a rectangle around it (it doesn't have to be right where the lineart starts or stops so long as the lineart is inside the rectangle). Once you do that, there should be an border of gray around your charart. Then use the bucket tool and fill in the space between the lineart and the border in gray (or the other color you decided to use, but make sure it's consistent; make sure you're not filling inside the lineart, just the outside). Then, re-select the lineart with just the select tool and, once again, go around the lineart (it's okay to include some of the gray, in fact, I'd recommend it). Go back to where the select button is and click the down arrow, then select "Transparency Selection". Move the lineart over your actual charart, and then use the bucket tool to make it white. Re-select the charart with the lineart over it and move it to the corner of the canvas, and then minimize the canvas until the edges are touching the lineart (you'll have to make sure that this part is right on so that you don't mess with the dimensions and have it the right size). Sorry, it's a lot of textual explanation, but the video showing this was deleted from youtube and I don't have time to do a full tutorial to show you. I can quickly do a join.me though if you can catch me online sometime. ;) 21:49, April 28, 2013 (UTC)


 * Still not working.Can we do a join.me sometime? 17:02, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) (Star) ~ For Approval
Shading was killing me. Comments? 22:14, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit? It looks a bit flat. 22:15, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''The shading looks dark because of the texture. 23:16, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Make the texture match the kit more? It's not as, erm, "mottle-y" as this texture. Bb un   legs  23:17, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sort of unsure about that. Usually, with the texture, if I put it at brush size 1, the texture won't show. I'm not sure I'f I can match much more. 23:19, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Good point on the texture. I'd say...perhaps sharpen it a bit, and that'll do the trick. Also, define the highlight/unshaded part on the legs, and there's a little waste on the charart by her tail. Lovely image! Those awesome eyes. *.* 23:25, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thank you, Knight. I could show you how, if you'd like. 23:48, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the tail. Lookin good. 06:40, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Skt. 20:42, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Sharpen/define the texture to match the kit more. 22:50, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sorry it's so late. I was a busy and I couldn't work on it. Now, the texture's as sharpened as possible, and if I make it darker/more defined it will make the pelt look dark-gray. 20:47, April 26, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the texture a bit 14:10, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Changes might not be showing, and I couldn't really lighten it, because some how my layers merged. x_x 21:08, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Darken (or define) the shading a bit? Looks a tad flat. 01:10, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Mosskit (Star) - For Approval
My baby ;w; <3 22:14, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? It doesn't look so dark on the kit. Bb un   legs  22:59, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  23:07, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

White on paws, body, and tail are very gray 23:40, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

it's because of the shading, but if someone else thinks the white needs to be defined, I'll fix it. o3o 23:42, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, her haunch and tail shading do look a little thick, and just a bit too dark, compared to the kit image. And there's a stripe of white missing on her chest. Lovely image! 01:09, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Also, maybe make the patches a bit more hard-edged like the kit. She looks awesome. ouo 04:42, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 03:59, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, sorry. I've had a busy few days. I'll get the re-up in a second. 16:28, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Again, sorry for taking so long. ^^; 16:42, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

I think that the white on the tail is very gray, and there is an uncoloured pixel there, too. Could you also lighten the shading on the haunch a tad, please? 16:48, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Well, darker shading tends to make white look gray, but I lightened the stripes on it. 18:06, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts on the tail and her front paw? (the paw that's closest to us) 01:16, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  03:44, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Mosskit (Alt. Star) ~ For Approval
Comments? 22:46, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Erm, I think you forgot to add the date to the reserve. Anyways, define the shading a bit? Bb un   legs  22:49, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I just added it. I think the shading's fine, but if anyone else agrees, I'll change it. 23:02, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

I think define wise it's okay, just lighten it on the chest a very small tad, please. 22:52, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:02, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree with Thistle. I think it should be defined a bit.

Reuploaded. Layers somehow merged on my .xcf, so I had to start over. I preffered the old one. Don't think changes are showing. 21:44, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I think she's too dark. She looks black, and the alt kit is much lighter than this.

Reuploaded. Unsure about changes. 22:17, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

I still think it's too dark. Also, the chest shading is flat. I don't think it should be like that, unless your light source calls for it. Perhaps add a highlight of sorts?

Reuploaded. 20:52, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten 'im a bit more? Maybe you should colorpick the base color from the kit. Bb un   legs  20:56, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Colorpicked from alt kit, so I won't change color again. 21:09, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

The chest shading still looks very flat. 21:11, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

I think the shading's too dark, moreso on the chest and tail, and that's what's making it appear darker (which parts of it still look darker than they should). So, perhaps lighten up the shading on those parts?

It may just be me, but the shading seems to be a bit blotchy, too. Could you blurr it a bit? 00:04, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

Oddfoot-Kit~For Approval
Starclan, these blanks suck...

And the foot looks terrible too. And I'm not even gonna start on the shading...Pikachushinx the power of the past 11:00, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Can you match the stripe pattern more, and make his face, chest and belly paler, like the warrior? 15:00, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Sure, lemme just finish what I'm doing firstPikachushinx the power of the past 15:30, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I would just say to make the twisted paw point inward instead of to his other forepaw. 21:24, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'll add to Sorrel's comment of matching stripes: Could you kind of sharpen them up, and add several more around the charart, then smudge them, like the warrior image? Also, extend the "m" on his forehead up a little, to make it longer. Pfft. He looks cool. 01:04, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

The light source on the head is different than the rest of the body. Move it so that it casts shadow on the right side of his face and light on the left. 04:40, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't do anything else with those stripes. I fixed the stripes, the foot, and the shading.Pikachushinx the power of the past 08:38, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

It needs a transparent background, there's an unfilled pixel on the top of the head, and there needs to be a pale belly, muzzle, and paws. Also, stripes need to match the warrior more, in where they're placed and how they're smudged. 12:19, 04/23/2013

Okay. The background isn't transparent though? I remember making it transparent...Pikachushinx the power of the past 14:02, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a wee bit, too? It looks too dark. 18:36, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Try look (not copy) at Thai's version for help on the pattern. 18:48, April 24, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 10:48, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Darkness of the shading is the artist's choice. Blur the unshaded parts a bit so they blend more, and maybe make the parts a bit bigger on the chests and the front paws? 01:15, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Lion's Roar (E) - For Approval
Ew. Just ewww. I know, it looks green. Took the colors from the kit but I can alter colors as y'all sees fit. Comments? 02:04, April 26, 2013 (UTC)

There's some waste outside of lineart by his muzzle. I like this~ 03:41, April 26, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe define patchy fur? Beautiful! 20:08, April 26, 2013 (UTC)

Also, I just noticed  the stripes seem to go onto the patches. Unless it's supposed to be like that, you shoud probably get rid of it. 20:10, April 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded According to Loonie, tabby cats have striped skin, just look at Spiderstar 00:16, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes less smudge-y to match the kit a bit better? Nice work! Bb un   legs  00:27, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:56, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

It says he has "thin fur", and on this, it looks pretty thick. Is there a way you could make the fur looked thinner? It doesn't have to be like Running Horse, since he has scant hair, but maybe a similar technique? 19:44, April 29, 2013 (UTC)


 * Just out of curiousity, since his description says "thin pelt", should i just redo him as a short hair? If so, I'd probably change the colors a bit so he doesn't look quite so... ...green... 03:17, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Perchkit (Star) ~ For Approval
Ugh this took forever and I'm still not happy with it. Comments? 22:03, April 27, 2013 (UTC)

The kit looks as though it has a blue-ish tinted shading. <span style="">23:35 Sat Apr 27

There's a random black line on his shoulder that isn't part of the lineart. 22:53, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think the shading has a tint in it. It might be your computer. Define the tail shading a tad, it looks kinda flat. 23:32, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

Duskwater(E) - For Approval
Yeah this sucks, comments? 03:01, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge the white some to make it match. Also, define the tail shading, and lighten the shading on the white or whiten the white to make it less gray. Nice work! Bb un   legs  03:02, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I didn't change the shading on the white, because only the bottom part is grayish, and some is going to be partially gray no matter what. 03:08, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Shading appears to be a tad flat. Define it? Or darken it. Your choice.

Also, can you define the place between where the fur ends and earpink begins? 19:14, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit? I understand it's a small area to work with, but it looks like it could be blurred at tad. 23:26, April 29, 2013 (UTC)

Troutclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
I don't even know with these stripes 10:58, April 30, 2013 (UTC)