Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

=Images Pending Approval= Please use this section to put images up for approval only.

Dark Whiskers (SC) - For Approval


The key word is blur. The shading and highlights must be blurred together to make the pelt smooth and not blotchy. Use the smudge tool and the blur tool together, do whatever you can to make it a blend of light and dark, and not patches of light on a dark pelt. Everything else looks fine, Shaf. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Creekfeather (K) - For Approval


Take the smudge tool to it. Make the stripes look like faint feathers brushing the pelt, using the images on Creekfeather for reference. The shading needs to be less blocked, and more subtle like shadow. You may even have to completely redo. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Queen) - For Approval


Shade the strip of white on her back, where the shading ends. If the background is transparent, the shading should have no effect on the background. I see nothing else wrong. Nice job, Elorisa. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sagepaw (A)- For Approval


Blur all shading thoroughly, particularly that on the haunch. Other than that, very nice, Dovesong12. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the tail shading and the shading on the back. -- 20:31, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (Q) ~ For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the stripes could be a tad bit more noticible. Nice job otherwise! 03:34, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Pouncetail (Alt. A) - For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. A) - For Approval


Blur so that the pelt is smoothed, and not blotchy. Use the blur tool and smudge tool, whatever you can, to smooth out the patches of light and dark so it all runs together smoothly. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Stoneteller (Alt. H)- For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Macgyver (W) - For Approval


All the patch transitions and ear pink must be blurred. Shading needs to be added; use the burn tool to add shading along the back, chest, tail, legs and head. You may want to withdraw this and work with our art tutorials on your own, to learn about shading, before you continue to work on this. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks very unnatural. Try using a different, less neon shade, and blur it as well. -- 20:22, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall~alt.Kit~


Ear pink desperately needs to be blurred; take care not to blur the lineart. Make the pink color fade into the gray, so it is not popping out. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Background also needs to be transparent. 03:35, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W) - For Approval


Much too dark. Lighten the entire image, and then blur/smudge to smooth the highlights together with the entire pelt, so it blends together and takes the appearance of a natural pelt. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Alt.Ki)


Add some shading and blur thoroughly, so the pelt is smooth. Darken and soften the ear pink, so it does not stand out so much. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Rippletail (Alt A) - For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Harveymoon (KP) - For Approval
19:44, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm; make the transition easier. He seems almost a two-toned cat, with gray on one side and white on the other. Use the dodge tool on the haunch and shoulder and lighten it some, so it seems to shift easily from white into gray. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Bramble :) Done. 03:31, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Setting 24 hours before approval. -- 03:42, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. Kit)-For Approval


There is blurred lineart around the yees, which needs to be fixed. The shading on the kit's left side is too thick; lighten some of it in the center and blur the rest, to make the pelt look smoother. The kit also looks cross-eyed; make the pupils in the same position in both eyes. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''I completely redid the image because my previous one was so terrible XD. I've fixed the eyes, shading, and pupil location. Thanks, Bramble! ^_^ -- 20:17, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowflight (R)- For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Ki) - For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

The nose color is way too dark. Try a bit lighter hue. Very good, though! ^_^ -- 20:18, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (KP)~ For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think the pelt color is way too dark. The lineart can't be seen, and the image looks like a silhouette with yellow eyes floating in it, if you know what I mean. X) -- 20:25, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Lighten it a bit more, and there is some blurred/smudged line-art near the tail. 20:27, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight (Alt. A) - For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really good and I see no problems except to me the back legs look very. . . straight. Like, there's no natura; curve in them if you know what I mean. 05:40, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you mean.-- 06:14, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think Mosspool means that the legs do not look natural. Like..look at Briarlight's warrior image; the legs are more curved. 15:14, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) - For Approval


Either lighten the shading on the back or get rid of the highlight next to it by darkening it. Then blur thoroughly. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA) ~ For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt.D) - For Approval


Ear pink is too dark and desaturated. Use Firestar's ear color, and see how that works. There is also a white pixel on the chest fur, near the top. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Are the changes showing? 03:36, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink is too big. It's almost out of the lineart; try making it smaller. 03:37, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Made it smaller. 03:39, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and I also blurred the little orange outline. 03:49, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Frosty, but I still really don't think we need this image as ginger and orange are the same colour. 05:56, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I still think there is something going on with the ear pink. Also, the lineart near the part of the tail nearest to the rear looks slightly blurred. -- 20:30, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is no blurred line-art there. Could you be more specific on what is wrong with the ear-pink? :) 20:31, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure? I guess I described the area wrong. Here:



I've drawn an arrow to the blurred spot. It's okay if you don't see it; maybe it's just me. :) Also, for the ear pink, could you make it a tad lighter? It's sorta hard to see it. ^_^ -- 20:45, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:52, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

That's better. :) Looks good. -- 20:59, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is still all weird... There's a section that seems to be cut out from the original and stuck further up the ear, if that makes sense. 21:44, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Alt. Kit) - For Approval


Return the lineart to its original color on the face; it has been paled. We'll see how it looks after that. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:48, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Kestrelwing (Alt. Medcat) - For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights just a tad more.. Beautiful image, though. 07:42, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D) - For Approval
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Setting 24 hours before approval. 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Cora (W) - For Approval


Lighten the entire image and blur thoroughly to get rid of the pixel-y texture. Everything else looks fine. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Mapleshade (W) - For Approval
Yeah, laugh it up, it's terrible. Bring on the comments! Let me guess, the orange is too bright? You know what, there really is an advantage to staying up late! XD 05:46, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches together more. This looks great!-- 06:15, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

As Nightshine said, blur the patches; right now they look too separated. This is fantastic! -- 20:19, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The gray/black splotches look...kinda un-natural somehow. Maybe change the pattern, instead of keeping it as the dip and hill thing. XD Nice name I gave it, eh? 20:23, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

http://calicocat.info/calico-cat/calico-cat-1.jpg I sorta referenced off this cat. I want it to look like this. . . I love her pattern. I don't know. . . . xD I guess I can try and change it a bit, yeah. 21:53, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Queen) - For Approval
So many things wrong with this charart...This is my first one for the project! 07:05, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the patch on the forehead a bit thinner, and darken the shading. Great image, cuz! 07:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more noticeable. 15:12, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It's barely visible. -- 20:50, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

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Welcome to the project! I've added you as an apprentice. Please take a look at the guidelines before reserving and posting a charart. If you have any trouble making your images look at the tutorials for help. I hope you enjoy this project =)-- 06:20, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

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Moonleaf - Join Request
May I join the PCA? :) ★Moon  leaf★  18:22, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

PtEЯO&gt;-Join request
May I join project character art?

I have contributed to this wiki before but I would like to contribute with art as well as words

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Maplefrost - Join request
I have been wating anxiously for the 23rd :D so I could join. I am EXTREMELY interested in joining Project Charart. Thanks! Maple  frost!   19:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)