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Luna (KP) - For Evaluation
Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:59, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Get rid of every other white thing except for the tail-tip. Unless specifically stated to have other white points, we follow our tortoiseshell rule here. Also don't align your images. 14:01, 11/12/2016

And this image needs to be renamed to File:Luna.kittypet.png 14:04, 11/12/2016

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 14:42, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you brighten the tail-tip? It looks a little too gray to me. 14:42, 11/12/2016

define the shading on the legs and tmake the brown a little less green looking. 15:59, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:09, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Do you mind smudging the brown and ginger a bit?

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:50, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the tail and legs? 02:57, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 05:41, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and give it some shape; it looks rather flat and I'm having some trouble making it out.

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:54, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

could you whiten the tail tip please?

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:26, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some more depth to the shading? The way I'd do it is add a 'base' shading that's darker and less blurred than the rest. I can give you an example if you don't know what I mean.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:24, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Give me an example, please Джулия де Мортон (talk) 14:56, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Okay so you add a base shading, sorta like this (blur/smudge it off course) and that's how I give my images depth. Of course, this shouldn't be exact, adjust yours so it matches your shading placement.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:11, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 12:42, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

There seems to be an irregular amount of ear pink on the --> ear.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:43, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 09:22, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:11, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:22, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) ~ Declined
Eh --Cheetahfur (talk) 02:10, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Is there a way you could possibly make the pixels look less grainy? 02:11, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

I know this is probably a difficult pattern to shade, but can you maybe define the shading a bit? 02:52, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd? You are close, but the markings and colors are a tad bit difficult to tell because of layers/layer modes. I am the OA of the apprentice (first in the set) and the dapples on this are actually a little too soft. 03:02 Sun Nov 13

Add the pupil. 04:33, 11/13/2016


 * Does he have an eye color? 09:11, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Scarlet Pebble is a she, and could you make the speckles a bit more defined. —  Minkclaw   15:03, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

Mink, that's exactly what Sunjaw said already, tbh. 16:07, 11/14/2016


 * My apologies, I didn't see that. —  Minkclaw   16:49, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe try to even out the earpink -- it looks blotchy because I can see the spots under it.


 * That's normal, Holly c: Maybe define/sharpen the shape a bit more? 07:10, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

I cant see any pupils

I already said that, Fox. <span style="">13:37, 11/17/2016

sorry, didn't notice your comment.

Mind matching this image to Pebbleshine's queen image?

It should match the apprentice image, not the queen, because the apprentice is the first in the set. But anyway, are you still working, Cheetah? 15:25, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Could I take over possibly? <font color= #111111 face="Calibri,sans-serif">Maplepaw <font color= #e6e8fa face="Calibri,sans-serif">(talk)

Reuploaded I gave it a half decent shot I reckon <font color= #111111 face="Calibri,sans-serif">Maplepaw <font color= #e6e8fa face="Calibri,sans-serif">(talk)  20:08, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

This is pretty! Define the ear-pink a bit more. Not quite sure how to explain this but the shading on the chest and forelegs is a bit too straight and doesn't quite look natural. Maybe give it some curvature with the muscles? 05:29, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Can you lighten the back shading?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:25, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail. 00:18, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Not to be a bother but the darker flecks on the rest of the images are a lot...smaller, for lack of a better word. Do you think it's possible to fix that? <span style="">14:10, 11/27/2016

Declined due to lack of work. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 05:48, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) ~ For Approval
i redid the base color and ear pink to match the apprentice —  Minkclaw   19:38, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Theres waste around the left ear. 19:52, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Remove the texture, as the apprentice image that was posted before yours does not have texture.

The base on this still looks a lot darker than the other image

I color picked it from the Apprentice, so I think its alright? —  Minkclaw   20:36, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   20:42, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

The nose is empty, and there's still waste around the <--- ear, like Breeze mentioned.

Re-Upps waste removed, gray cats don't have pink noses, they have dark gray —  Minkclaw   03:08, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

the nose must match the apprentice. there's grey cats with pink noses in this series already. 23:12, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

I think the eyes must be blue 02:15, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   17:32, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking a bit on the back foot and haunch, and the nose pink should match that of the apprentice. 19:54, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten/smudge the shading.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:37, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, forgot to put this —  Minkclaw   03:53, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the nose, or something along those lines, so the bright color doesn't just jump out at you? You have a few pixels to work with, so it's possible to do.

Re-Upps fixed the brightness of the nose pink some as well as added shading —  Minkclaw   22:56, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Her apprentice image has a nose color of #DD8AA6, this one has a nose color of #7A4949 (that's the brightest color I see on the nose since it's shaded.). Just saying. 02:33, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Forgot to mention, there's also waste around the < ear. I can open up the image, take out my color-picking tool, and I would find red-pink colors.02:35, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, I've already removed the waste there's no more.. —  Minkclaw   21:17, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

There is, but it's very light. Take out your color picking tool and sweep it outside the lineart. I can still see the waste there. 01:43 November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   03:18, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. <span style="">14:13, 11/27/2016

The waste around the ear is still there; it's further out but I can still see it.

Re-Upps, since the Apprentice was declined I changed the eye color back to amber, re-added shading, also dd shading depth but its a little darker than before. —  Minkclaw   21:22, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste around all the image. 21:24, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   21:34, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is a transperant pixel--> along the very bottom of the tail. 21:39, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   21:52, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed.

i don't see it? I followed the eye thing from the Apprentice's tutorial plus I used some of the other KP as examples. —  Minkclaw   03:22, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I can move one of the eye's over a little if that's what needed? —  Minkclaw   15:03, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

That's exactly what I was going to ask you to do. Mobile doesn't allow for in-depth comments.

Re-Upps, moved the right eye over just a tad. —  Minkclaw   22:24, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there's a ... idk, but there's a part of the texture or something missing from --> eye and the surrounding area, and it seems like it was just cut out of the image.

It wasn't really missing I just seemed to have made that area darker for some odd reason —  Minkclaw   17:13, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the lighting on the hip? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:17, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

what do you mean? I think its fine? —  Minkclaw   17:08, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Imma agree with Jayie here; there's very little light on the hip. The shading there is much overblurred and could actually use some depth, as well.

Wrenflight (Star)-For Evaluation
Here she is. Comments? First character! :)

23:51, November 21, 2016 (UTC) This should say For Evaluation in the header. And lighten the shading up. It looks too solid. <span style="">00:59 Tue Nov 22

There is a transparent pixel in the --> ear. Also, be sure the image is before your comments or signature, and it shouldn't be a thumbnail.

Redo 02:20, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Think I may redo. 20:10, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 21:15, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? 21:17, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 21:30, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Try to even out and match the texture better to the other images

Did you trace over the lineart? The lines look a bit wiggly. 05:57 November 23, 2016

Yeah I did,I wouldn't do it but when I paste the image onto gimp the back round turns black. So usually I trace it over with pencil, then hide the layer under it so it's white. 20:30, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Make sure the image mode is RBG, I think that's what the problem is. 20:32, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

This image needs to be reuploaded under File:Wrenflight.star.png, not what it's named now.

Omg, still won't work. O_O 20:46, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 22:56, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Some of the original lineart seems to have disappeared.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:40, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, like I said Stealth. I have to trace over it because the background becomes black. talk about Annoying. Then I have to retrace then, color. 03:09, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 03:40, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Try to blur/smudge the shading on the ear. 03:47, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Rendone 04:22, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred between the ---> leg and the chest. 17:36, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 17:50, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink needs to match the color from her other images. 18:12 November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 18:28, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

You need to reupload over Wrenflight.star.png, instead of uploading multiple files.

Alright, one question though. Should I upload the next tweak under Wrenflight.star or should still use this one? 19:30, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

You need to use the file I told you; we have naming guidelines that must be followed.

Mk. 19:34, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

There we go. :) 19:37, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe darken and smooth out the shading? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Hello World!  22:54, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 23:58, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Gonna redo because I found a new style. 06:18, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 07:03, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

the shading looks hard edged, blur it please —  Minkclaw   15:04, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 17:04, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred/smudged. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  00:57, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 01:35, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tail, it looks too flat right now with the shading only on the tip and the base of the tail. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:20, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 00:30, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge/blur all of the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:00, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 01:07, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Carpkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I'm going to try not to withdraw this again. Comments? 02:29, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Oh my gosh I just want to pinch him! <3 The ear pink looks black, can you lighten it?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:42, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Not really; any lighter, it will be hard to see. 17:02, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

I'm finding it hard to see as it is, though. It looks like it's part of the pattern itself, not ear pink.

I tried several different colors, and this is honestly the best I can get. Anything else is even harder to see. 17:12, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Then perhaps alter the base a bit? I can't tell that's ear pink at all, and I can almost guarantee that it'll get nominated in the future, so I really don't see why you can't try and tweak the colors to make it more visible.

Reuploaded. I'll fix the earpink later. 17:18, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is about as good it's going to get. For some reason, I absolutely cannot make the earpink even kind of visible on both ears. It would always be easy to see on one ear but not the other or hard to see on both. 18:11, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Adorable! Maybe the white parts need to be lightened a bit more. The mottles need to be a tiny little bit more smooth. CookiesAreEpic123 (talk) 05:36, November 25, 2016 (UTC)CookiesAreEpic123

Reuploaded. 01:50, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit? Neck shading on these blanks can be such a pain.

Reuploaded. 02:06, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:25, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:44, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Nettlespot (Star) - CBA
05:27, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

could you blur or smudge the spots a tad; this is great ^^ —  Minkclaw   17:35, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

She doesn't have to do that, Mink, as it's not like that on her other images.

I think there are meant to be sort of bands on the tail, like on the queen (since I think it's the same angle?). Can you add some?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:45, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:26, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

could you lighten the shading possibly? —  Minkclaw   21:21, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:00, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? 21:31, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
RECLAIM! Anyways, just touched up little Quailie, and added a bit of criticism from the other Quailkit for approval. --

The white still needs to be dulled quite a bit. It's way too bright. Could you also smudge/smooth it out? <span style="">14:16, 11/27/2016

The colors on this need to match the other image. 15:49, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Like Waterclaw said, colors need to match, especially ear pink, eyes and pelt color. Sorry if this is repeating. Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I am  a  true Monster  22:40, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Colors no longer have to match, due to the other image being withdrawn. Could you smooth out the shading a bit? It abruptly cuts off, or so it seems, and it should be a bit smoother on the body and tail.

Re-uploaded TFW you leave your computer alone for a minute to get food and the next you almost upload a charart with a gun above it because your brother graffitied over your art --

Blur the chest shading a tad. It's a bit too sharp. 03:28, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Brightened the belly 'cause I noticed it was way too dull and I had trouble seeing it. --

Smooth out the shading a bit more in general. 21:36, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

I know you don't have to match the other image, but if this one has white on the bottom of the chest like the last one (I can't tell), then maybe lighten the shading on the white so we can see it better? If there isn't white there, then ignore this. :P Also, smooth out the shading on the shading on the tail, and have it follow the curve of the tail more, and not quite the sharp curve that it's on now that has the entire tip cast in shadow, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:29, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded it's actually the belly, not the bottom of the chest, Jayie. If I got my way, Quailkit would have a much bigger belly than he does RN, but other PCA'ers disagreed. I want a bigger area, sniffle sniffle. I also tried to do the tail as depicted in Sunjaw's guide, but it's long-haired, so I tried...? my best to do it as a shorthair. --

Milkfur (MV) (Q) ~ For Approval
First queen and white cat. Comments? I tried to match the other image's shading. -

could you smooth the texture/shading, can't tell which it is, but it looks blotchy? —  Minkclaw   21:23, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, I was trying to match the other image. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Hello World!  22:50, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job :) Perhaps even out the texture some, mainly on the body and tail.

Re-Ups Thanks! - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  01:10, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Give the overall shading a bit more depth, especially on the tail and stomach. Remember, a pregnant cat would have a fairly rounded belly and the shading should show that with the depth.

Re-ups Thanks for that! I think it's okay now? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:57, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

it looks like there's some white leaking into the <-- ear —  Minkclaw   17:21, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, and have the shading on the tail follow the direction of the fur more, if that makes sense. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:31, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Appledawn (Star) ~ CBA
20:30, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

this is really good, could you define the nose pink? —  Minkclaw   20:54, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

I love how you make the eyes stand out! 17:06, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Remember Cloudheart, you're only supposed to comment for critique comments only. Anyway, could you possibly make the tail stripes thinner. They're not as thick on the other image. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  20:33, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks:) 20:49, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? 21:30, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Downkit (Star) ~ For Approval
20:36, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? It says she has fluffy fur. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  01:12, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, it wouldn't be. There was a discussion on their images on the old declined section, and it is supposed to be short.

Fluffy does not mean long. And anyways, down feathers are short feathers on a premature owlet or other bird.

this look great! there's ear pink leaking on the --> at the very top —  Minkclaw   17:20, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 17:32, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:32, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload, Hope this is fine. 16:41, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Leafpaw (VS) (App) - For Approval
Came out better than I expected 21:23, November 27, 2016 (UTC) this needs to match, File:Leafpaw (VS).kit.png, the black needs to be smudged quite a bit and possibly darken texture? —  Minkclaw   21:26, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Please define the shading. ^^ 21:28, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste all around the left (our left) ear and on that side of the head.

Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster 21:34, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:35, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't see the difference? The black is still blotchy and the shading I can't see at all. —  Minkclaw   21:38, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The ear pink < on that ear is barely noticeable with the overwhelming black. Also, the shading seems to be PURE black.....

Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I  am  a  true Monster  21:54, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:25, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

On the other image, there seems to be more defined lighter parts. Could you try to match the colors a bit more?

There is nothing wrong with using black shading, and it is perfectly acceptable. <span style="">23:39, 11/27/2016

the texture is underneath the patches on the kit, not on top. also needs black on (her left) side of the muzzle, the lighter grey is much more dfeined and the black is darker than on this, as well as the cream being paler and much less of it. 07:46, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:17, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded There was too much black >.<  19:20, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

break up some of the black, define the cream a bit, and the nose should be a dark grey. looking good. 22:27, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:21, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink and nose color still need to match. Also, maybe add more gray, and there is a small patch of that cream color on the left (our left) ear. This is getting so good Cinderrrr! Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I am  a  true Monster  02:25, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Argh I accidentally hid the earpink, I'll fix that later. (Also, Winter, you might want to put your signature in User:Winter432/Sig, it takes up a ton of room this way. In your signature box, put User:Winter432/Sig .  Sorry for the off-topic >.<)  02:32, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:35, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Cinder. Also, maybe still add MORE gray, since the other image has lots. 04:38, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:42, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Darken shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:33, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:19, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Cypresspaw (A) - For Approval
So my tablet is acting up...lol. I like this though. Comments? <span style="">13:38 Mon Nov 28

define shading, great job —  Minkclaw   15:07, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine, no? Maybe smooth it out? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  20:27, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I can barely see most of it. It needs defining in my opinion..=/ —  Minkclaw   22:19, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

looks plenty visible to me. 22:25, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I agree with Jose1116, maybe smooth out the shading a little bit. Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I am  a  true Monster  02:26, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

I can see it on the screens for my iPhone 7, desktop, and laptop. It's fine.

Darken the shading a bit on the hip? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:35, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reedpaw (HJ) (A) ~ For Approval
02:01, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

did you give her heterochromatic eyes? lighten the tail shading some —  Minkclaw   04:49, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Ooooh, heterochromia! Are there any other odd-eyed kitties? Anyways dull the earpink --

ear pink looks fine to me. —  Minkclaw   04:54, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading or highlights on the tail. Is this molded after one of your cats...? I feel like I've seen this somewhere before.

reuploaded based it off a random brown tabby, and i'm not dulling the earpink because i'll get about 5 messages saying to define it. 18:23, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Wow, I love the pattern on this. :D Define the shading on the tail and in the ears? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:37, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded ty 14:55, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Toadskip (Star) - Withdrawn
Oh my god please forgive me I haven't done one of these in such a long time jesus 02:52, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Needs lots of blurring. Way too blocky! Rah rah rah rah you are very rusty rah rah rah rah improve improve improve rah rah rah you need work rah rah rah playfully, not in a "i'mma diss you" manner --

Neon, none of that made sense. If your gonna give critique please be specific instead of saying rah rah rah through most of it and the blurring of the shading looks fine to me, just lighten the main body shading just a tad. —  Minkclaw   04:52, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Mink, chill. I'm pretty sure that was just a joke on her part, since Icy literally has not made a charart in ages. I would say blur the white a little bit and thin out the stripes; they're not quite as thick on the other image as they are here. I can give you a hand in a couple days if you'll need it.

Even if you were joking that message was extremely disrespectful and actually offended me a tad. Anyways I'll get on that stuff (just wanted to point out how I felt ¯\_(ツ)_/¯) 07:09, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps very slightly smooth out the edges of the white as well; looks a bit sharper than the other image

Re-uploaded:  ( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°) 01:16, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:39, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Withdrawing. My computer broke. Surprise surprise. 06:06, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Birdwing (W) -  for Approval
my first warrior. ~Patch   feather~   18:45, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

smudge/blur ear pink it looks a bit blocky —  Minkclaw   21:44, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' ~Patch    feather~   22:09, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps smooth out the shading on the cheek? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:59, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define the paler muzzle please. It's more emphasized on the other images. 02:19, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.  ~Patch    feather~   19:55, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading? And is it just me, or is it leaking away from the back a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:45, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I checked and it doesn't look like it. ~Patch   feather~   14:12, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

Harrybrook (W) - For Evaluation
Here goes nothing. 21:34, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothen out tail shading -- 21:36, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

This needs to match the colors of his kit image more

smoothen and lighten body shading —  Minkclaw   21:45, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:58, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Harrybrook's kitten image has a lighter white and this white here looks gray could you lighten that so it matches the kit image —  Minkclaw   22:05, November 30, 2016 (UTC) Lightened the underbelly  22:55, November 30, 2016 (UTC)
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No idea if its just me but I was just looking at the kit again and the white along his front seem pretty long from what I see on the kit it goes from mid chest to his muzzle —  Minkclaw   02:02, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Mmm...I think I understand what you're saying. Judging from his kit image, I see the paler parts going from his muzzle to along his belly/underside, as evident from previous version of the kit images. That's why I have the paler parts the way it is on his warrior image. A second opinion, perhaps? 02:09, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

It's not white, it's paler gray.

Oh, well from what I saw on the kit it was more white than pale gray, however, was only asking about the width of the paler parts. As explained earlier form File:Harrybrook.kit.png the paler went form mid chest to his muzzle. —  Minkclaw   15:16, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Shorten the paler parts, and redid the highlights So like this? 16:37, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, so, I'm the one that tweaked the kit, and I can tell you that the pale part does go down to the underbelly. It also goes just above the nose, and shouldn't be near the eyes. This goes way too high up on the muzzle, so you'll have to shrink it up on the muzzle, and extend it to the underbelly as well...please tell me this makes sense.

Expanded the paler parts to the belly and shortened the muzzle  Thanks for the clarifications, Jayce. I think I did it according to your clarifications? 18:49, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

If I'm correct there seems to be some shading or something leaking on his elbow/shoulder area just above the curve in his haunch thing —  Minkclaw   17:17, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Did you mean the paler part of his belly? I believe that is supposed to be there. 17:42, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back of the neck, and on the tail? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:49, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Darkened the shading on the neck, tail, and a little bit on the spine, and fixed the eye (because it was bothering me) Thanks!  01:21, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Cricketkit (Star)~For Evaluation


Here is Cricketkit. I added some texture, though I made it a little transparent so you can see the dapples. 21:58, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

this needs renamed to File:Cricketkit.kit.png —  Minkclaw   21:50, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Actually, you were correct in your original naming of the image as File:Cricketkit.star.png; this is her StarClan image, not her kit image. As for the image, could you define the shading a bit? 23:45, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Redone  00:04, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

My apologies then on the naming, im super exhausted and must not have payed attention. —  Minkclaw   02:00, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there's an orange spot on her muzzle next to her nose. 02:17, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

It does seem like it, but im preety sure its part of the nose. 03:32, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

no that her muzzle, the nose is very small —  Minkclaw   03:57, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Im at school right now, fix it when I get home. 14:03, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 21:18, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading, and give the eyes a liiiiiitle more depth? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:53, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, it looks red Shypaw11 (talk)

Redone 15:47, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Cloudmist (W) ~ For Approval


-- 22:08, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Earpink needs to match the apprentice, and I can't see the pupil

Reups -- 22:19, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like the ear pink is too far down, can you bring it higher? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  23:10, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Any chance you can add some shading to the furthest hind paw? The one tucked away. 23:18, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Fill in the eye color, define the light on the tail, and blur the main body shading a tad. 23:41, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean by "fill in the eye color"? I did fill it in. -- 00:23, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I couldn't see that it was filled in. I do think you should define the eye depth, though. 01:07, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reups -- 23:41, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading - I can barely see it on my screens

The ear pink still hangs too low on the closest ear. Mind shortening it more from the bottom? And has there ever been a warrior image with ear pink on the furthest ear (ie. a warrior image with ear pinks on both ears)? If not, I don't think it should be there, but I may be wrong. *shrug* 03:25, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking along the back. 21:21, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Also, the ear pink seems to be overlapping the shading. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:54, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reups -- 03:39, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there is some shading leaking off the right side of the tail all the way towards the back of the back legs. And it looks like there's still some pixels of ear pink on the furthest ear. 03:54, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Rileypool (Warrior) ~ For Approval
<span style="">00:19 Thu Dec 1

The ears need to be darker to match the other images. 00:26, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Would you like the file? The stripes look much different. <span style="">00:30, 12/01/2016

There should be more, thinner stripes, and the stripes should be smudged. Would you mind lightening the shading just a little? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:57, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Dewpaw (HJ) (A) - For Approval
21:19, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

could you smoothen the haunch texture some —  Minkclaw   23:07, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:19, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading on hip, and maybe make the ear pink stand out a little more from the gray by making it brighter/more saturated, if you don't mind? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:58, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:09, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Foggy (KP) (KP) ~ For Approval
gave it a shot

Smooth out the line of shading on the back of the hip? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:00, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded tried to

Smooth out the shading a fair bit more, pretty much everywhere.

Fidgetpaw (ki) - For Approval
Smaller blanks make this pattern extremely difficult.