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Stormfur (PH) ~For Approval
Here he is! A while ago, I put this same thing up, except with the old prey hunter blank, and it was declined because the new prey hunter blanks were being worked on. So, comments?- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 08:49, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreask looks a bit....strange. Blur it more, and also blur the shading. 10:19, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Good job with the eye! And the mud is as red as the ear pink. Make dark brownish. More highlights on the tail 14:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Make the ear pink fill the whole part of where the ear indicates. Make the mudstreaks a little less uniform and make them go kinda crazy on him, so it looks more natural. 14:21, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the belly and bottom of the tail. Also, Darken and smudge the mud-streaks to make them look a little more natural, Like Ivystripe stated before. 16:16, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks are red! Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 17:08, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Stormfur.ph.png. 20:11, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and darken the shading. Snowdazzle  ROAD TRIPPP!! 22:40, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The mud streaks could use some work. You should make them a more brown-ish color, as opposed to orange-red. And you should tryand blend them into the fur-color more too. Shade under his head and the ear farthest from us. Fawngaze 22:00, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changed mud colour, blurred shading, darkened shading, added more highlights onto the tail, added shading in the places Fawngaze requested.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 01:15, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

The mud still seems a bit red, try to make it a bit more of a pasty brown and darken the shading a tad more. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 01:21, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the brown. — PercyJackson101  &#124; Talk 14:55, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the mud that ran over the lineart on the back :] 19:57, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Try making the mud streaks browner. And the earpink is a little too pink. But good job. Shadewing  So unlucky we are... 00:18, June 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Reuploaded. '''Yes, I made a completely new one. Oh yes, and Sandstormrocks32, for the eye, while I was making the first one, I stole a copy of Brook's new prey hunter image, and uploaded it into the art program I use(Adobe Photoshop) as well as my Stormfur one, and zoomed into the eye on both Chararts, and copied the eye style from Brook. I remembered how to do the eye for the second image.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 04:25, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the mud color just a bit, change the eye color, it looks red. Add shading on the head and legs. Nice job! 22:26, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mudstreak parts I circled more narrower and longer. They look like big blobs. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:24, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Smudged most of the mud, and added some streaks to his face.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 09:52, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Better, but some of the mud is still in big blobs. Good job, though. Shadey  Iro Ni! 13:32, June 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

To much mud and redden the ear pink 19:03, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink color is fine; just smudge it. :3 02:34, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''You mean smudge the earpink so it looks like a gray tuft of fur is going up into the ear? (see top of section for my reuploaded ear). And I think the mud is fine.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 03:08, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud smaller and sharpen or do something with some of the mud, it can kind of blend into the pelt. Also put/ add shading on the head, and legs (make the legs darker, head lighter) 19:57, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:39, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the mud on his face. -- 09:03, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Did you get all the colors from his cave-guard image? The fur looks kind of too light, but good job! 17:59, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid it.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 09:53, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, Kitty! Can you darken the mud please?  Law liet  Me ow 02:07, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Also, add some mud streaks along the back and legs. 22:30, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

And redden zee (the) earpink. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple and darken a blur the mud. also, is there any shading on the mud? If not, add some. It looks kind of funny since the charart has shading, but the mud doesn't seem to. Good job though! ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The Mud looks strange, and darken the shading, fix the earpink. Nice work! 16:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 'I redid it again''. But I think this time it actually looks good :D. So, comments?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 02:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the earpink. It looks better now! 22:09, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the mudstreaks. This is looking nice. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:17, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think I messed up the mudstreaks :(- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 02:51, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the mudstreaks look just fine. They actually look natural. I'd say maybe blur the ones on the tail only a tad. 06:53, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred and smudged tail streaks and made eye less red/orange.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 02:44, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should make the mud a bit smaller, and I'd define the shading more (I.e. lighten the highlightsand darken the shading) Looks great! 00:49, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights more. Its hard to tell where the shading is. 22:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working this? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 14:08, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. I'm gonna reupload soon. Sorry for inactivity with it.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 03:25, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Mudstreaks blurred/smudged, highlights brightened, shading darkened.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 02:42, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. 01:00, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Did as Mistystar suggested.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 08:34, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Unless I'm looking at the wrong one, there seems to be a tiny bit of blurred lineart where the tail and haunch meet. Just pointing that out for ya. Btw, this looks beautiful! 19:31, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed blurred lineart where Cloudy said to, and also there were tiny bits of blurred lineart on the tail. Btw there haven't been many constructive comments recently. Do any of u think this is approaching CBA?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 01:09, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it is. But the shading looks kind of uneven. Make sure the dark parts are equally dark and the light parts are equally light. 23:13, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower (Q) ~ For Approval
First charart! Comments? This was declined before... <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 01:32, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

In some places around the lineart, it's pixlated. So blur or smudge it so it's all around the same color. Blur the darker shading on the back and tail, and fill the ear in more with the earpink. 01:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might have to redo this because it's all pixelated. 02:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed. Try basing the eyes off of one of the other queens for approval, like Brook. 02:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Save it as a .png not a .jpg, move the earpink make it a tad bigger and darken it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 02:22, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is a .png Maplepool, but it looks like it WAS a .jpg before. You'll probably have to redo this, sorry. D: ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:20, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, define the earpink, fix the eyes...and thats it! :D 15:27, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

OH! I know what you did, you used the 'Sharpen tool' Didn't you? I think Gimp might have I don't know, as I have never used it, don't use it, it kills the quailty of a image, when you redo her image, give her a pink-gray nose, like Feathertail an Crowfeather and Jayfeather's kit image, or Marshscar/star's Leader image, it looks like the nose is the same color as the pelt. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 18:21, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll redo it, I don't really care. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded or Re-Done ~ Gosh, this looks WAYYY better! <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It does. :D Blur the earpink. 23:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Comments? <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 23:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 02:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 11:12, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Looks good Snowdazzle! =D 11:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried blurring it as much as I can. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 11:43, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred a lot 19:54, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Snowy this is beautiful! Blur shading and highlights. ^.^ Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  02:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll reupload this as soon as I come back from vacation. ~Snowdazzle, not signed in.

Darken and define the shading. 19:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but what does define mean? I'm just so stupid at times :P <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  11:58, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make it more visable. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:11, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken it too and stretch it up by her foreleg and her haunch. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid it since I just came back from vacation. Changes aren't showing. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  20:23, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading or is it just that changes aren't showing? 21:27, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

They are not showing. Look at the second-to-top image on the file page. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  21:35, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular. 23:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I personally think the earpink is fine... <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  00:08, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? No one's commented in a while. Sorry, I'm just wanting to get this approved by the time school starts. 22:34, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Commented in a while? Its only been a few hours since you said that the earpink was fine. Really, I only get impatient after 2 or more days of no comments. xD The earpink seems to fill the whole ear, so make it a bit smaller. 22:59, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, xD 23:11, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

You should blur the shading a bit more on the belly and the back. 23:52, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Are you looking at the correct image? It's the second-to-top one on the file page. 00:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the neck and on the hind leg. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:07, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:27, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the hind leg. 22:49, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:17, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty. CBA? 01:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights some more~Sorry xD -- 00:35, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's alright. xD Changes aren't showing. 14:56, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:48, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights on the back paw. Other than that, I see nothing wrong. Great job, Snowy!- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 08:38, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:28, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

could you darken the earpink just a teensy bit? other than that, it looks perfectly ready for CBA --Guradian1098 00:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this gets on CBA! 13:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

She'll get there, Snowy. =) I only see one thing. Could you just blur the chest/stomach highlight a tiny bit? It looks gorgeous, much better than my Graypool. :P 15:51, September 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Naw, Graypool looks great! 20:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 03:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but the eapink is really light, you can barely see it. This is amazing though! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Paleclaw :3 12:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To be perfectly honest, I think this should be darkened a little. This looks a lot like the queen images where they are described as being white. It's a wonderful image, but it just seems a little too light. 00:54, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

So..I have to redo it? I have GIMP btw. 23:31, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

No! you dont have to redo the whole thing. Go to Brightness & Contrast(assuming there IS a 'brightness & contrast' option..) just lower the brightness -- 23:50, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also, blur the tail shading a bit, and this will be ready. 00:11, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing! Yay :3 00:18, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (A) - For Approval
Myfirst one! I know the highlights are bad but I kinda suck at it. >,< I didn't know if I could put it up because her warrior one is currently in the making, but I used that as a guide. Comments? -- 21:38, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the stuff around the tail, and get rid of those pixels. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:45, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploded. How can I fix the hind leg highlights, or is it fine? I already tried blurring it. 21:58, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um, did you add the hind leg highlight more than three times? <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 22:43, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Can you define the earpink by lightening it and blur the highlights more? 23:06, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um, yeah, I think so. Only for the hind leg one, though. I'll try to blur some more. 23:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

the chest seems too gray, i think it should have no white (or in this case, gray) Bluestar11796 23:36, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploded. '''I blurred the highlights some more. I think their fine now. I got the earpink color from her warrior version. I lightened it up a bit, but I didn't want to to much because it would look different. I got the white chest also from her warrior version, so I just put it in. Instead, should I lighten it up? 23:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I tried making the chest lighter by putting the normal white color and smudging it around. 23:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The chest fur looks way too smudged. <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:04, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. 00:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)'''

Oooh, I like this! Add/darken shading on legs. :) <font color="lime" style="background:Blue">☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste off the lineart at the back of the haunch ;) 02:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, nice job for your first charart! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  03:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks! :] 14:23, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste by the backside of her haunch, also it looks like you have light blur pixils near the top of her haunch, dunno if you meant for that to be white or not 20:04, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, define the earpink. 19:14, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sorry, I wasn't aware that Tweak week was over. It might take a while to see the changes so look at the changes page thingy. 01:11, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys, the person who did her Warriors charart decided to change it, so I'll try to redo it tonight. :P 01:24, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploade. '''To match her warrior version. I had to rename it because the changes wouldn't show. I made it: petaldust.apprentice.png from Petaldust.Apprentice.png Should I delete the previous one? 15:37, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbing. Looks good, Poppy! You can't delete any of them. Only an admin has the powers to do that. However, you can mark it for deletion, and someone will take care of it. 15:44, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Umm, sorry I don't know what de-thumbing means. And I don't really know how to mark something for deletion. Could you tell me how to and what de-thumbing is? 16:31, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, it just has to do with the way the image appears on the page. Nothing to worry about. Next time, just remember to only put File:file name inside the, and nothing else. Also, when you mark something for deletion, you "edit" the page the image is on and put the Delete tag on it. Simple as that! 16:39, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cool. Thanks. Any other comments? 23:46, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and add shading. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:28, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I have added the shading except for one place. The white part. Whenever I try to burn it won't show. And if I make a new layer and make the shading it looks different. Sorry if I'm being hopeless but any suggestions? 01:23, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight, and make the earpink bigger 03:31, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white muzzle some more. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  11:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 14:24, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well if you're using the burn tool, don't make the white a pure white. Make it a little darker white, but not gray. x3 20:22, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''The problam was I had to burn it like 8 times. XD A little extreme but it worked. 21:25, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 23:31, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Changes not showing. Check changelog to see. 03:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Any other comments? 21:20, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and brighten the ear-pink. Smooth out the shading on the chest; it's really blotchy. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:22, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 14:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ginger patches to make it look more natural. And the highlights make her look kinda plastic-looking. If you're using pixlr, dodge the haunch, head, shoulder and tail-tip two or three times. If you're using GIMP, do the same, but use the pencil, make the color white, lower the opacity, and only dot them once. If you're using something else, I don't know. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:11, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail a bit and does the chest look a bit gray? 21:31, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chest a lot. 21:56, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sorry, I'm not very good at highlights or shading on torties. 17:52, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the black parts more to match her warrior version. 23:24, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

You should blur just a teensie bit at where the brown fur meets the white on its forearms. 23:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uloaded. '''I haven't had much internet access because of Irene. So that should explain my delay.. 19:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. 23:02, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur all the highlights a lot. 00:55, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches a lot. 19:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 15:00, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the paws, and blur the haunch shading and define the earpink. 23:15, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 22:39, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. 17:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)'''

Define the patches on the leg. 04:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on the hind leg and tail a little bit darker. Moonstorm88 09:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, blur the shading and blur all the white parts. 00:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Stormkit (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Ok, I know I put 2 images on, but I couldn't decide if she was mostly gray or mostly ginger, so I put them both on, and I'll let you decide which one's better. Comments?Bluestar11796 00:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

First, don't make this a gallery, and don't make it a thumbnail either. Whichever one you choose, which I think the first is better, blur the patches, and define the shading. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:11, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, but when I tried to put them on separately, the first image disapeared, that's the only reason I put them in the gallery. But, it's fixed.Bluestar11796 23:40, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I say go with the second one, but make the gray lighter, since in the graphic novel it appears to be a very light, almost white, gray. 23:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you need to change it to the proper eye color. Her eyes are amber, not brown. 23:45, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

There, fixed it for you x) Tone down the ginger, looks too bright :\ and blend/smudge the grey and ginger together. -- 23:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you're going with the second one - The lineart looks a little blurry, though it may change. Blur/smudge the patches and blur the stripes. Also, redden the earpink some and define the shading :3

If you're going with the first one - Blur the stripes, smudge the patches, redden the earpink and define shading/highlights. 23:48, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Who is working on this, no one signed. If you go with the first one, make the gray look less...weird, maybe make her paler ginger, and paler gray? and tone tone the gray down? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me, i forget that quite often.Bluestar11796 00:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I had always thought of her as more of a Sandstorm color. 01:04, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Not to be mean, but I don't think this is how she was depicted in the book. Let my check my copy of TR and see which one she is again 02:02, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

go to google images and look at a picture of a ginger and gray cat, they mostly have a sandstorm color of ginger. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

U mean leik this? -- 02:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded (or more like re-done). I made the ginger more like on Sandstorm's charart, and I really like the first one, but, its up to you.Bluestar11796 03:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, now make the gray a bit lighter and the ginger part a bit more ginger (they look tan now :\) -- 03:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and go with the second one. The first one is awesome but it's not how she was depicted in the book 14:51, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be blurred on the ginger patches. 16:10, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I decided: Gray with ginger patches (even though I think that the mostly ginger one is cool), so,''' Re-uploaded. Bluestar11796 16:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading is too dark. Please fix it. I love the patches, btw. Good job! 16:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the stripes on the paws, it looks to unreal. other than that, great job^^ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger patches larger on the body, add shading on the tail, make the earpink redder, blur the stripes, along with the shading. Nice work 17:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights, and define the earpink. `

Reuploaded. changes not showing.Bluestar11796 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 21:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur lighting, I see circles there. Leaf-storm,7:35,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Instead of completely getting rid of the paw stripes, I say you make them horizontal instead of vertical. But that's just me. 14:26, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gray and ginger.... huh, is that ever possible? XD Anyways, this looks GREAT, but the shading seems a bit funky, like it's got two different shadings, one for the gray, and one for the ginger, it doesn't look all the same, if that made any sense. XD It's like, it's shaded in different places on the ginger than on the gray. Any way of fixing that? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:06, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:52, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

@Paleclaw, Well, it HAS to be otherwise, she wouldn't be Gray and ginger, nor my cat's kit, Spots xD This looks great, blur the highliths a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:59, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should make it look like a dilute tortoiseshell, which is like a cream or pale ginger and gray. It makes more sense if you ask me. xP 20:18, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I know you're not supposed to use the cover images but on that one it has a lighter gray, maybe that would make it look more natural Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:16, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

That's not really what a dilute tortie looks like. Basically they are a gray tabby with light patches of cream. Right now the ginger is too bright. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 06:36, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is a tad off-topic, but maybe she's a torbie (tabby-tortie mix), that could be possible. 13:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be a bit more solid looking. 21:40, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been uploaded for a week. Are you still working on this? 22:28, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm still working on it, but I started high school almost a week ago, so I can't work on it much. I'm at school right now!Bluestar11796 16:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but try to work as much as you can, or else this might get withdrawn for lack of work. 22:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 01:10, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it as well. 01:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This should be declined, as the picture hasn't been updated in over a week. Nothing against the user, but I do believe those are the rules. 04:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, they are. I think someone can take over now, or this will be archived. 23:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

A lead needs to decline this, I would change the heading but I do not believed that I am allowed. 14:44, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Um...could I take over? I would love to! 20:06, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, if you're not doing Tigerheart anymore 20:28, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

^^ Thankies I'll get working on it ASAP I'm probally gonna redo most of it.... 23:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded bleh meh no like this. But comments? 00:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gray and ginger meet. 00:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluredafyed? 00:18, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a gray nose 00:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Never knew that....

Tone down the earpink, blur it, and smudge the ginger into the gray more. Yo, Sandstorm, mind if I ask you a question? -- 01:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I can only be one for a minute so shoot. What's your question? 01:45, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger; and darken the shading. 04:21, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's on the second file page. Thanks for all of the comments :3 15:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ginger patches; they look a bit too golden. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:41, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Wow it does look better now I really like this

Darken the shading. 00:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches in the direction of the fur, to give it some sort of texture. 01:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bleh tryed my best with the smudging but, bleh 12:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink; it looks blotchy. Also, darken the shading. 00:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (W) ~ For Approval
Here she is! What do you think? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink and change the side the highlights are on, on the tail. 01:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes more orange, less yellow. Rename the image Graypool.warrior.png. 01:53, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurred earpink, changed eye and highlights, renamed image. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 02:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading on her neck and right by her shoulder more 02:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurring job is a fail, but I tried. ^.^ Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  02:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good job ^_^ Add more highlights to the upper part of the tail, though. 02:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This looks EPIC Shady! xD Brighten the tail highlight ;) <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  13:17, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading just a tad. Looks good otherwise, Shadeh! 16:47, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit blotchy; blur it and smoothen it; define the light source, add more shading to the tail, and blur the earpink. Great work! 17:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. What's the light source? (This is my first charart, sorry). Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 17:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Gosh i know what it is but i am HORRID at explaining things....so i can't help you, I'm sorry DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 17:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - The blurring was a fail. I tried. And it's fine Maplepool. xD Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  17:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The changes aren't showing. Help? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 17:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If the changes don't show, there's nothing you can do about it. Just look at the second-to-top file on the file page. The changes always start to show after a few days, don't worry. :D The light source means where the light is coming from; for example, if the light is coming from the side of the cat, the highlights would all be on the side; if the light is coming from the front, the back would be darker than the front. Hope this helps. =) 20:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a million. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 21:22, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Changes still aren't showing. Defined light source. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 14:35, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Their is some blurred lineart near the shoulder. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  19:43, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the blurred lineart goes down the back, also. 20:05, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, I see. I'll get that cleared up, but I don't if the changes will show...thanks though. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 22:17, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Um I fixed the shoulder lineart, but I didn't see any blurred pixels on the back. Changes are finally showing! xD Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  22:43, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink looks like it's a little off to the right. Either redo the earpink, or just expand it to go towards the left more. 23:25, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Complete FAIL. Oh well, I tried. And of course the changes aren't showing again! :3 Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  00:07, August 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright, the changes are showing again! The earpink is a fail. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and highlights. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:42, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Uhh, I don't think the changes are showing again, but I can't tell. Does it look any different? (Sorry, I'm so stupid sometimes). Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:07, August 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I have no clue xD. Er... blur the earpink some more. Gawjus, Shadeh! <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  00:40, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurred earpink. It's not that great, Snowy, but I did my best. :) Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  00:54, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there is a gray stripe on the back, get rid of that and blur the earpink a bit more. Also, there is some blurred lineart on the tail, and it may be just me, but the top of the lineart on the tail looks a bit lighter. Otherwise, nice job. 17:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed. Changes aren't showing again. =( Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  22:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright I think the changes are showing now. :D Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  13:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading is too dark on the back and the....front part of the cat. I think you can fix it ;) 15:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I completely re-did her. The shading on the old one was disastrous, I couldn't get it to lighten. Comments? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 19:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better Shadeh. Blur the tail shading and the earpink. :3 <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  23:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and highlights. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:17, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit and the highlights. 21:44, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight bigger. 22:23, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed. 12:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink. 23:59, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. 13:57, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Enlarge the ear-pink a bit more and darken it. Blur the shading on the tail and around the highlights; maybe darken the highlights a bit. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:11, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to bright. And make the original color be seen, not just the shading and highlights. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  01:04, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on this, I'm so busy! XC 21:08, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I might redo this again if I have to. Comments? Changes aren't showing. 20:38, August 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the highlights and the shading. 01:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I blurred highlights and shading, re-did earpink and tail. Changes aren't showing. 13:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think it's a good time to mention that the top file on the file page is the new version. The first smaller one in the blue table. Sorry, guys. :p 00:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Redden the earpink. 00:54, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes still aren't showing. 03:02, September 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Something's wrong. I typed in a link for the full size image, and now it's taking me to a page with the name of the link. Can someone help? 03:06, September 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I tried it, and it worked fine. Are you sure you typed it correctly? Also name this Graypool.warrior.png. 23:33, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Changes are showing. 00:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink easier to see by making it more solid and a bit brighter. ` 00:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

And dull the highlights a little bit. 17:50, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading under the chin. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:42, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on this, I'm just really busy!! I'll upload the new version ASAP. 20:54, September 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading on the back is WAY too dark and the ear pink needs to be smaller 22:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I officially suck at chararts. Added shading, dulled highlights, and made earpink smaller and brighter. 14:28, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Center the ear pink and ill CBA this. 03:32, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes aren't showing, and the file page isn't showing the changes either. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 16:32, September 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink more triangular. 00:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Tanglewhisker (E) - For Approval
FINALLY. After over a year of not doing chararts...here's the horrible result. DX Comments?  HA WK FI RE98  16:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't bad, this is really good^^ there are a fex stray pixels around his head, darken the shading a touch. looks great^^ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:57, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Love what you did with his pelt. Maybe highlight it a bit more, though. It's really dark looking. 16:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

You also need to add some gray to his back to match his description. 16:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think you have any earpink O.o. Please add some. I agree with Maplepool, this looks great! 17:00, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add earpink, and define shading/highlights. 17:01, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Some of the stripes look a tiny bit blotchy, and I think a couple went over the lineart. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 18:09, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I agree with the people above, some waste around the ear, and like his description says, he needs a graying back. <font color="#99ffff">The Stars Align <font color="#66ccff">Isn't there somewhere I can buy snow? 19:43, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good! Add some Ear-Pink (I dont seee any), erase a few stray pizels behind the head, and add a graying back Fallenstars 04:53, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fallenstars, you don't need to repreat what's already been said. 19:29, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Any chance of you lightening the whole thing a bit? It's so dark it's kind of hard to see the messy fur. It's fine if you can't, just a suggestion. This looks AMAZING! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:03, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know I already commented, but I noticed something else. In his description, it says he has a "graying back." I don't see any gray. Any chance you could add some? =) Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  21:12, August 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

...Are ya still working on this? 0_o lighten up the pelt color and define the shading -- 00:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfire hasn't updated in about 48 hours... Should someone else take this up before it's declined for inactivity? 03:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... we usually wait about a week before we decline images. This is fine. 14:26, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Did it ever say that he has a gray face and paws? It doesn't say so in the description SpottedtalonMudears 20:20, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It's supposed to be a graying muzzle and paws, meaning he's old. 20:22, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Its been four days without comments now...Are you still working on this? 16:19, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

If I remember right, Hawkfire either didn't reserve this, or took their reservation off the table. 16:20, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Then, shouldn't this be declined? 16:31, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with that. It should be, although it is neat. =( 05:33, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, someone can always take over...its been a week without reuploads now, so this should be withdrawn. 22:20, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can I take over? 8) -- 22:13, August 27, 2011 (UTC)18:37, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, guess Im takin' over! so... Reuploaded - added graying back, earpink and lightened the whole thing up a bit. changes arent showing.. =.= -- 00:22, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the gray in a lot. 01:19, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I redidit, since it said wide 8) Wow! Look at that, changes aren't showin! Now what are the odds of that? =.= -- 01:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Little momnt! We can tke over chararts? Ow.. yes I think there is missing ear-pink? I don't see it.

Leafstorm, if an image is gonna be declined due to lack of work or is withdrawn (or something similar) someone can take over. It's always been like that. And this is looking great, but maybe make the back the same color as the muzzle? Maybe a bit darker. I don't know. XD I just imagine him having a gray back as it being like.... hairs turning white, like they do on humans. This looks great though! ^^

Reuploaded - gaiz forgot to to sign, would ya? xD -- 15:32, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think you could make the back a little less dark, to be more grayish. 17:36, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I just lightened it, and I can promise you that it IS gray x) Anything else? -- 18:01, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

The back doesn't look gray to me, because you have brown tabby stripes going through it. If the changes aren't showing, I'm sorry but this computer takes too long to load it. 19:45, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Make the gray on the back softer. Make it a bit more like a tinge rather than a gray tabby patch. Define the ear-pink. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:12, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - second one from the top -- 05:04, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad bit. 13:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded - I wont be uploading again until I get more than a few comments from now on. I dont like cluttering up the file with different versions DX As usual, changes are on the second one from the top.-- 23:57, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Define the ear-pink a bit more. Make the patch on the back a bit lighter. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:43, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

And erase the waste around the back. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:45, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'll erase the waste once this gets approved 8) -- 00:38, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Just erase it now, it won't get approved until it is erased. xD Also, define the earpink and darken shading. 00:54, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - That's better xP, Anything else? -- 01:18, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 23:39, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 00:10, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit; look at Poppydawn's charart, the colors are similar to this. ` 00:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *eye twitches* -- 00:45, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the darker shading, darken the eye, and make the earpink more triagular as well as a bit smaller and lightening it a bit more wouldn't hurt either. Beautiful job. 04:37, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks perfectly fine to me, but I WILL fix the shading. you sure your looking at the right one I linked above? -- 18:53, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Comments?-- 22:01, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

no comments...C'mon gaiz, is it really that horrible? B( -- 03:04, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

If it was horrible, there'd be a LOT of comments than you can imagine. Make the earpink a liiiittle smaller. 04:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, see, while redoing this, I forgot to save it layered so whenever I tamper with the earpink, I'll just ruin it. So for now, Im just gonna leave it as it is. You cool with that? -- 05:36, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

...Anything else? =.= -- 01:10, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Stop asking if someone has something to say every five minutes. Its a waste of space and recent wiki activity distraction =.=. If you do it for your next charart i wont CBA it. Be warned. CBA? 03:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm reaaaaaaally sorry to interupt, but the back's bothering me. Can you make it the same color as the muzzle? If he has a graying back, it's probably just losing it's color, like the muzzle would, not turning a kinda dark gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Change the heading, Paleclaw. XD And, yeah, I sorta agree with her, actually. 07:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the gray and brown more. Moonstorm88 09:59, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There, I lightened the back. If it STILL looks too dark to you, its because of the shading -- 05:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't mean just lighten it though, I meant make it around the color of the muzzle. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:55, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ For approval
Meh. I don't really like this XP Anyhoo, comments? Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  14:17, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart. Fix that please. Looks awesome though! :D 14:21, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

You need to add stripes to the ginger patches. Otherwise, looks great! 14:22, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Re-did the whole thing. Added stripes, no more blurred lineart ;) Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  15:00, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

UGH! The file is being stupid. I'll work on it, but the one above right now isn't the right one X( Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  15:04, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I fixed it. I know it's not named the right thing, but once it gets approved I'll fix the name :) Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  15:11, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

You need to rename it Dawnbright.warrior.png and try putting a splash of ginger on the paws or something like that. Darken the ear pink so you can see it better. 18:21, August 18, 2011 (UTC)



There is still some blurred lineart.

I circled in red where the spots are. Sorry if I am being picky about this, I can help with it if the blurred lineart really frustrates you. 23:30, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...Ivyheart...that's not the right picture. The one you circled has no stripes. 04:40, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yea, I was gonna say o.o the method I used the make the one with stripes, it's impossible to get blurred lineart. I'd explain, but I'm so friggin' tired I really don't want to xD Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  11:33, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh, shoot! I'm sorry :P 20:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail please :) 01:23, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined tail stripes, added ginger to paws, and darkened ear pink. Changes aren't showing yet. Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  14:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

define the stripes on teh head and right ear and define the earpink too x) -- 22:22, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ginger on the paws. 23:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:11, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't look very visible, it kinda blends in with the fur. Define the earpink. 00:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hate to say this, Ginger. But this needs to be redone as a longhair. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:29, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the hind leg. 21:48, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it as a longhair, and make sure to add shading to the tail. This one doesn't have any. 23:21, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redone as longhair, tried new style. CHanges aren't showing yet XP Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  19:03, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I like the new style. :) Darken shading, lighten highlights, define earpink. 22:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

The tail coloring looks a bit wonky. I can't really see the shading and highlights. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  01:10, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Look's good. Darken shading and blur ginger patches a little. Good work! Leaf-storm,14:23,August 27,2011 (UTC)

Dull the ginger parts, it looks too neon. 19:32, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! ;) But I think you should darken the stripes and lighten the shading just a tad. This is really great! 16:07, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, just make the earpink a little smaller. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  17:51, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing. I don't like the way it's turning out, and I made a decent image for Lakeshine's queen. Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  12:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Somebody may take this over now, otherwise it will be archived. 17:06, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over! My Piper (K) has gone through 24 hours of CBA, anyway. 21:51, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Done. 23:35, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing, but it's on the file page. Also, don't tell me to blur the shading because I've blurred it as much as it can go. 23:37, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Try blurring the white on the forehead some 00:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 04:07, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now the shading, and all the white parts, as well as the stripes, are blurred as much as possible, so I can't blur anything else. 04:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink? =P This looks really cool! 04:22, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.. Are you sure you were looking at the file page's correct file? xD 04:40, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger paw and blur where the ginger meets white just a tad. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:45, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white more white. Moonstorm88 10:07, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. And, the white has shading on it, so its not supposed to be pure white. 22:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Firekit (Ki)- For Approval
My first offical charart :D Comments? I feel like she should be a little brighter. I'll try to brighten the ear pink if people can't see it. 14:21, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I moved this to the correct section and took the image out of a thumbnail. Since she is ginger, she'll need stripes, and the earpink needs to be darkened. This is lovely for your first charart. :) 14:25, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you C: I honestly don't think she has stripes, but I'll add them anyway. 14:27, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added the stripes, except on pixlr when I try to blur them they fail Dx. Changes aren't showing yet. 16:25, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

For some reason the changes aren't showing. I'll upload it again. 17:53, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Silvereye, nice job. I hope you remember me from chat xD Anyway, add more stripes to the top of the head, and make the ones on the body a little bit longer, so they reach the chest. 22:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! make the stripes longer and wavy, define them, make the earpink more pink (less gray), and add some stripes around the eyes -- 22:33, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

When I try to make the stripes wavy, they come out all square like. Oh well, I'm working on it now. 12:08, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok, I made the ear pink more pink, and a made the stripes longer. Let's hope I don't have to redo it again /shot. If I do I'm alright with that. 12:38, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Could you try making it light ginger around the muzzle, like she is shown in After the Flood? You don't have to, (at least I don't think), but I think she'd look cute 16:41, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Where did the stripes go? Sa lc  ie  16:43, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

That would be the manga alternative, so no. And everytime I try to upload it it doesn't work -_- 17:33, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

The tail needs some shading SpottedtalonMudears 20:16, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still attemping to get the right version. This is the one before the actual. 20:41, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's that color for the fur. It looks more creamy than ginger. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  06:30, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I like the fur color. I was trying to make it similar to the manga coloring. 12:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, the newversion appears to be up C: 12:33, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add stripes to the top of her head? Tabbies always have stripes there. This is coming along nicely. 13:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is like brown. Make a little redder. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:49, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the earpink by either lightening it a lot or reddening it a lot. 16:21, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I had the stripes on the head, but it went back to a different version Dx Trying to get the new version up now. 17:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a little longer. 22:17, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights and blur the earpink a bit. 22:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Connect some of the stripes by adding in little Y's and of course make them longer. 00:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok, here's the current one. 16:20, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. The one of the left looks smaller than the right one as well. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:17, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks purple. Make it pinkish-red. 22:57, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 21:45, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Attempting to get the new version up. 14:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, new version is finally up.. 00:16, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add a lot more little "y"s, and I'll CBA this. 14:36, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

And pinken the earpink a bit; its too purplish. 00:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Why would I need to add more "y"s? I think it's fine just the way it is. 21:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't need more "y"'s because I don't see a "Y" striped tabby. Just extend them a little further on the chest. 17:09, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

And make the earpink less purplish. 23:40, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, attempting to get the new version up. 12:01, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 03:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but can you blur the earpink just a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred the ear pink well. And ok Icestorm :D. 13:03, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't have to be a Y tabby to do this. Connect some of the stripes to others, and make some touch the other side of the chest. :P 17:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know what you mean by connecting them. Facepalm all you want, but I don't know what you mean. /thinks she looks just fine. 11:28, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Look at Foxleap's kit for an example. 19:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Connected a few stripes. Wow, I think it looks much better with connected stripes o3o. 23:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) For Approval
Here's Rainflower. Any suggestions? 19:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It appears you didn't use the correctly sized base, and this should have been put below Blackstar. You're going to have to redo this in the right sized base. 19:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC) This is good but yesh, I'm afraid you will have to redo this. ;) Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  19:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''sorry but what is the right sized base? 19:44, August 22, 2011 (UTC)'''

http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Warriorlongf.gif 19:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

oh sorry i see it now. thanx 19:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploded wiith the right base I don't think the changes are showing yet. Comments? 20:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The changes showed up comments? 21:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is white. Make her a light gray, or just take the colors from the queen image I have up for approval. Also, rename this Rainflower.warrior.png <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  21:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is smudged all around, define the black in the eye, thicken and darken the shading, and define the highlight on the tail. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

You should give her a pupil, for starters... 23:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

ok and snow it is light gray. it isn't white!? 23:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I dont know if the changes show but now she's as close to the color on her queen image as i can get. i think her lineart is not as smudged, i put a pupil but i don't know if it shows. Also how to i rename her? Comments? 00:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Much better Lion! Um, I still don't see a pupil in the eye. If you go to Firepelt's tutorial, you should be able to find the eye design. Also, the earpink looks a bit odd, make it a more natural color. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:21, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better! (holy cow I didn't know Shadewing was gonna say that...) Blur the highlights on her shoulder and haunch 00:23, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok. i'll try. ummmmmm how do i rename her. 13:17, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reupload it, but before you do, there will be a box with a "more options", choose this and you can rename the old file. I will mark the wrong file for deletion so it can be deleted and yours will have the right name 13:27, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok thank you 18:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

when i try to reupload it, it just goes back to a blank reupload page. can someone tell me why it's doing this ? And i don't think i can change the name. I couldn't find the button. sorry 18:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'll rename it. 21:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Renamed. The changes might not be showing yet, so give it some time. 21:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

thank you! 00:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

ok 13:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and also blur the earpink. :p 15:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded i dont know if the changes show. 21:29, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and the earpink. Maybe perhaps you should redden the earpink a bit 22:42, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

i reuploaded it so it may not show the changes but i'll do it again and i tried reder earpink but it just looks wierd. 22:53, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Its too light. Take the color from her queen image. 23:27, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did mistystar 13:53, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Then why is it too light? 15:36, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

i don't know maybe i did it wrong. i'll try to make it a little darker. 20:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

The color is better now, but the shading should blend into the pelt more. Try either making the highlights bigger, or blurring it a lot. 23:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know if it looks any better 23:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Um, there are white pixels surrounding the eye. Also, the eye still needs a pupil and all. 14:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

i did put a pupil and i don't know about the white pixles let me fix that. 16:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. fixed the white pixles and there has been a pupil. 16:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, fix the eye (Look at Nightshine's tutorial on how to do eyes), and smoothen the pelt. 22:59, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

What exactly do you mean by smoothen the pelt? 23:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Fixed the eye and earpink but i don't know what smoothen the pelt means sorry. 00:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, nice job Lion! Blur ze chest highlights. xD. 21:03, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

As Shadewing said, blur the tail highlight. But the other two are really sloppy, no offense, and blurring would make them inconsistent. Make them like the tail and face highlights. Also, she's pale gray, not white. Add shading or darken it. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 22:02, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

there i shading. i think and none taken. i'll try anyway. 23:16, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think it looks any better. 23:22, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights stick out, and the earpink is too pink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 23:53, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

She looks white right now, darken the whole thing a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I Don't think the changes are showing.

She still looks white. Try to make her pelt colour darker. Stoneclaw33 09:37, August 28, 2011

I made her darker i think the changes will show up in a while. 17:11, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think the changes are showing. I made her darker. 19:15, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can I make the picture from another time become the picture that shows up on this page? Because i upload it but it just goes back to the original picture. Can someone help me?? 19:23, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Calm down. The changes just aren't showing. Give it some time, and they'll show up. We just have too many images on this wiki.... 00:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shade of gray; it looks like she's a white cat. Darken the ear-pink as well. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:06, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

ok thank you. 19:12, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I fixed her. She is darker, Fixed earpink and highlights. Changes aren't showing yet. 13:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty good. She looks much better now.I think the shading on her back needs to blurred a little more Stoneclaw33 12:42 August 30 2011

ok. 20:26, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think the changes are showing. 21:22, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink; it looks too neon. 00:48, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Changes aren't showing though. 17:24, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job for your first charart Cind! ^-^ 20:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. awwwww thanx snowy. 21:36, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 23:41, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it looks better though. 00:09, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

highlightes are odd have you looked at a tutorial? That could help. And the ear pink is too bright and blur it. 17:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. changes aren't showing yet. 21:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink not so hot-pink and brighten the eyes a bit. Also, maybe darken the main fur color just a bit more? Still looks white to me. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Changes aren't showing. 22:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink just a tad more. 01:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'changes aren't showing yet. 20:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ki) - For Approval
Here is my first charart :) Blackstar as a kit up for approval. I really don't like the paws... What do you think? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 23:32, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Moved it to the correct section for you and dethumbed it. He needs black ears and shading, and it appears that you used pure black for his paws. Use near-black so you can see the shading and/or highlights. 23:36, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can I ask where he was seen as a kit? Is this from the Warriors App? 23:41, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

You've also used pure white for his pelt. It needs to be near-white so the shading and/or highlights are visible. And yes, Cloudskye, it's from the Warriors App. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:45, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

We were on agreement to do app pictures, as I put up the discussion and nominated cats for characters needing art page 23:50, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I reuploaded the photo but on here the changes aren't showing yet. :/ What do you think. Too grey looking? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 00:33, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

He needs to be short furred, where is your light source? define the shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the edges of his front paws. They don't look blured on my computer. <font color="#FF3399" face="Segoe Script">Silver <font color="#9900CC" face="Segoe Script">light  01:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, and smudge the black paws and eartips as well. 01:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should look through a few tutorials, because I don't see any shading. Black and white cats can be tough xD. Good luck. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 01:58, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I think that would help. And see, this is why I think the kit system is a fail (no offense to Firestar, by the way) 02:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

This needs: be shortfurred,shadings and blurred black foots... Leaf-storm,8:21,August 22,2011 (UTC)

You don't need to repeat what's already been said; the artist will fix that 13:55, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading and also blur the ear pink. Darken the ear color and the eye color. 17:49, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I added shading and blurring. The changes aren't changing yet :/ What do you guys think? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 18:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste around the charart and you still need to make it short haired and define the shading 18:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I did make it short haired. The changes aren't showing yet.... ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 18:44, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Then reupload it again, it's not even showing in the history 18:49, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, add shading to the tail, and blur the chest more 18:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Ivystripe :) ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 19:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaller, and smudge the black paws upwards a bit more so it goes with the fur :3. 21:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. You know where to look :D ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading. It's looking better. 23:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:19, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

On the one front paw it looks there's a sort of light streak on it. And smudge the black on the paws. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:36, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. What do you guys think? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 13:55, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur hte earpink, and blur the highlights more. 21:42, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 00:50, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 22:11, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and the black fur. 22:44, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 23:18, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source. See Nightshine's tutorial on how to do shading. 23:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Again with the changes.... ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 01:30, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more, and blur the shading. 23:00, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Pixlr hates me. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 04:11, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

smoothe out the shading and define it too -- 19:30, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

There's a LOT of miscolored lineart right now, I suggest pasting a new blank over it, it should get rid of all of it really easy. This looks great! ^^

Whoever said that, sign with the four ~'s xD Rowan, if you need help replacing the lineart, I can definitely help, kay? :) 02:53, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops, forgot to sign. XD That was me. And I'd be willing to help too if you need it. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:08, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Paleclaw, but Ivyheart did it for me. (Thanks again Ivyheart!) 23:18, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I forgot to mention that Ivyheart Reuploaded it XD. 19:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, any comments? 19:07, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize or define the shading and blur it...a lot. Also, I think this would look even better if where the black meets the white, if you could really show the change in fur color like his leader image. 23:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

If you get GIMP while doing this charart, then the blurring will be a lot easier. 23:16, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail. 00:47, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anyways comments? (PS If I'm not on for a while it's because of computer issues. :( Someone could take my place if it's allowed.) 01:53, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

He's looking to the left (his eyes) see Cherrykit to see how the eyes or supposed to look. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 12:43, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, he can look left. Some chararts do, I've seen a few queens who aren't looking this way. 17:12, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Kind of like Mapleshade's queen image. Brighten the highlights on the chest, maybe. 20:05, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

The chest highlights are light enough. It could still be blurrred more at the edges, though. 23:44, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added the blurring as Mistystar requested. Any hoo, comments? 06:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a while since there were comments... 22:06, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, smooth out highlights --Guradian1098 15:14, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Small tweaks Rowan wanted me to do. Very minor :) 00:33, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's pretty good. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Is it ready for CBA? 16:45, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. 23:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 23:27, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (Q) - For Approval
It's my first in a while. On her page it didn't have an eye color so I chose a random one. Hope it looks good! Comments? Moon 20:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Darken the shading on the back. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  20:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tabby stripes on her face, make the earpink bigger, and to be honest, the eye color blend in with the pelt, but that's just a personal preference. 21:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The eye color looks fine to me Ivystripe. Redden the earpink and darken the shading on the white. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

You need to maek her long-haired, it says all Riverclan cats have thick fur. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have too, not all the RiverClan cats are long-haired (Reedwhisker and Graymist as examples. Define/darken the nose color. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

We are going to tweak them later, we are thinking to make all Riverclan cats long-furred. Scroll down ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I didn't see that. My whole mind's a blur today... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! I think there's some shading waste or something around her tail. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:33, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make it a longhair, and define the earpink. 17:43, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I will get to this as soon as I can, sorry started school and I am really busy with soccer and school. If I have to do it completely over I will try and get it by tomorrow. Thanks. Moo  nstr   ike  04:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. 22:45, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 23:34, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is a thin line sticking out of the tabby patch on the tail tip. 03:13, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Moon! *tacklehug* I've missed you. Darken the shading on the white, but overall beautiful! 23:24, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wait should I redo it or what? Make it long haired or what? I am confused... Some people say it looks good this way others say to redo it. Moo  nstr   ike  02:54, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, all RiverClan cats are being done as long hairs unless specified as otherwise. Sorry, you'll have to redo it. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:02, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Um, enlarge the earpink. 13:56, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I see that Moonpelt Isn't doing anything with it Leaf-storm,19:53,August 29,2011 (UTC)

Give her time, it's only been a day. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it and define the earpink. 00:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a lot more than a few days, it was last updated August 22. 17:14, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

It had been three days. Give her time. 17:23, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I was looking on the upload page. Sorry. 17:24, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, you don't have to re-do it. For my Skyheart image, I simply put the longhaired image as a layer over mine, and erased all of the lineart of the shorthair. The tail will be re-done, though. This can be frustrating, so you don't have to use this method. I think I remember Ivystripe explaining this, so you could ask her for details. 20:08, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over this cat ..I already made longhaired version..If you allow it.. Leaf-storm,15:09,September 3,2011 (UTC)

Go ahead & take over, it hasnt been updated in over a week.. >_> -- 15:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can I? Thanks! Ok, first I reupload it as longhaired..it needs some changes, say what do you think? Leaf-storm,16:22,September 3,2011 (UTC)

Oh, It's not showing! Leaf-storm,16:23,September 3,2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry... I've been very busy. Moo  nstr   ike  20:54, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Moonstrike, but Leafstrom already took over, if you take a image, you need to work on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:27, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and rename it Softwing.queen.png. 04:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Difine the earpink and make it more red.Moonstorm88 10:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Renamed only..I do other things later. Leaf-storm,12:33,September 5,2011 (UTC)

Oh, at last I'm home..Ok I reuploaded it now, I don't know if changes are showing Leaf-storm,16:58,September 5,2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Q) - For Approval
I added her yesterday, but somehow she was deleted. :P Anyway I know it sucks! <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. It doesn't match her other chararts, so get the colors off of them. 18:04, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also, isn't this more than the page limit? 18:09, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, and she needs a gray nose. 18:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is over the limit of 35. 19:12, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's not now, and the others should have been archived. 20:25, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

blur the stripes more -- 00:06, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and enlarge it a bit more. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:49, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing though.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:46, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I redid her stripes, blured the shading, and changed her colors to match her other chararts. I can see some white dots, but I colored those in, hang on I'm still editing her.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay fixed the white dots, but the changes arn't showing :P<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Now the changes are showing. Yay! I also blurred the ear-pink a little more. Hope it gets approved soon!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, blur the earpink more, and lighten the highlights. 20:56, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might not show.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the stripes and the earpink and the shading. You should redden the earpink too. 22:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

And it needs to match her other chararts. It has too many stripes. 23:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might show. I'm not sure. It looks like they are not showing. I removed some stripes, and blurred everything.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 03:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are not showing!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 15:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay changes are showing, a little.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 15:23, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more. 22:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I added a gray nose, blurred the stripes, and removed some black smudge around her tail.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:46, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Willowbreeze.queen.png, and remove a few more stripes. 23:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try, but there are other willobreeze.queen images.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 01:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Then overwrite the images :] 15:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But the previous image always shows up, but I'll try!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:27, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I canged the name to Willowbreeze.queen.png, and removed a little more stripes. Hope it gets approved!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur ze highlights, especially tail and haunch. 21:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She looks a little dark compared to her Warrior image. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 00:30, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Her warrior image was not apporved yet. I copied her colors from her kit, and apprentice pics.Also, I won't be on start after this, not until tommorrow.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 02:06, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, there's a white pixel on the front right (our right) paw. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 12:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes aren't showing. :P I fixed the white on the paw.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:33, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more and round it; it looks a bit flat. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:00, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading a bit more, and blured it. Hope it gets approved!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't everyone? xD Lighten the highlights a bit, and blur them. 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing now.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:29, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back highlight a lot. 23:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur the highliht on her belly and left front leg, blur the earpink a bit. This looks friggin awesome by the way 8D -- 01:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thank you! I blured the earpink, and the highlights.Also, I darkened the shading, just tell me to lighten it if it's too dark.:D PS. The changes might not show. :P<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, blur the front left leg and belly highlight more, make it look smooth like the tail & haunch x3 -- 22:33, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the changes are now showing! I'm gonna re-upload it now.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 00:44, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes arn't showing. But i smudged the highlights.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 01:01, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

heheh, your gonna hate meh for saying this but blurr/smudge them some more xD Oh, and darken the very bottom of her belly and chest shading -- 03:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes are still not showing! It looks way better than this.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 04:57, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 04:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur / smudge the stripes into the pelt and make the whole thing lighter.Moonstorm88 10:19, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make what lighter? Her pelt colors?<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 16:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moonstorm, sorry but the stripes should not be smudged into the pelt, because it won't match the other images. 00:07, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes are not showing!!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 13:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now the changes are showing. So, should I smudge in the stripes? Or leave them? :| <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is coming along nicely! Also, do not darken the whole thing like moonstorm said. It's supposed to match the others x) Anyways, blur the front legs and back highlights(heheh..) and did you add the darker shading to the very bottom of the stomach & chest liek I told you to? I dont see any .-. -- 21:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Silverhawk (W) - For Approval
I added the ragged fur because he's ragged, but I'd much rather smudge the pelt. Comments? <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The ragged parts look out of place, make them a dark gray, darker than any gray you'll use to shade but light enough so it isn't distracting. 20:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 21:02, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink larger. 21:28, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading between the front and hind legs. Also, shouldn't the spikes on his tail be going toward the tip rather than the base? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:37, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the spikes are rounded at the tips, make them more triangular. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 22:12, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:51, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

sorry but the earpink is a little of to the side it looks kind of wierd. 00:36, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Try to make the ragged fur more natural looking. You could use Raggedstar as a reference. 12:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- changes may not show, but I redid it. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 14:23, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 22:08, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and the earpink. 22:48, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 22:51, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Look at Raggedstar's leader picture, and make the ragged parts smaller like those. 23:59, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I've already made them smaller. Do they need to be even smaller? <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the tail should be pointing down... 15:53, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

They're supposed to be pointing up. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:46, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, now that the changes are showing, I can see that the ragged parts are smaller. Sorry about that! Anyway, lighten the light part (highlight, even though you didn't use highlights) on the head. 23:04, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:53, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes look kind of purple. 02:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

They were a dark blue, but I lightened them. Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 21:37, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the paws. 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- computer problems, so if there are late uploads, that's why. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:44, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit blotchy, just blur that, and I think its ready. 23:49, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 21:27, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I'm sorry, but could you get rid of the ragged bit on his forehead? I know it's on the Raggedstar charart, but it just looks awkward and way too close to the dumb emo bangs some people put on cats when they draw them. Cats don't typically grow long fur up there, it serves no purpose. Ragged fur on the cheeks, body, and tail, fine. On the forehead? No. 21:47, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like the bangs either. Anyways, blur the earpink a little more. 04:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:17, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good to me, Minty! CBA? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:12, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading more, sorry xP -- 01:03, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it looked fine to me, but I went ahead and blurred it. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 01:33, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating CBA. 03:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

One of the ragged parts of the fur on his tail connects to itself in the middle. Thicken it out so that the lineart doesn't touch itself. 01:02, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It does that on Raggedstar's. It looks fine to me. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:13, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 23:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (W) ~ For Approval


Now that Shellheart is done, on to Sunfish. And, for the record, I have Darkhallows' permission to do this. I just couldn't decide on whether or not to make her default brown or gray to match the "manga", and it was suggested I do gray. Not sure if I should darken it, but she appeared to be a very light gray anyway. I made her eyes amber because her name made me think that that would be the correct color. Comments? 20:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and smooth out the shading; it looks a bit blotchy. Darken the ear-pink. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:34, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the pelt colour ever so slightly? It seems too pale. 20:43, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, darken the shading, lighten the highlights. 21:11, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reffen the earpink and define it and the shading too. 22:50, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I mean redden. Sorry. 22:52, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded changes not showing. Did all suggested above, only darkened her pelt an iota because she really looks pale in the "manga". 03:38, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make her long-furred, as all riverclan cats have a thick pelt. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, make it longhaired, and darken the shading. 22:22, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

In the image from which I took her description, she was short furred. I'm leaving it as is, since it was the general agreement that we'd only make them long-haired if they were never described or seen as short haired. I will darken the shading, though. 00:30, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. In manga, you can hardly tell how long the fur is. You never know, maybe she's jus really skinny with lots of thick fur. 00:36, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. In any case, her description is 'slender', and that typically translates to short-furred. 00:51, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Not all the time, my cat, Flash is selnder, but she has long fur, and look at Poppyfrost; slender it says she's SLENDER, but her pixlis have long fur. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:48, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine. If everyone insists, I'll redo her with long fur. 02:57, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Erf. There's a random slash of highlight on the shoulder, which looks like the only highlight, and a random dade on the closer back paw. Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  19:09, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. Changes not showing. She's now long haired, as per popular demand. 15:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

You know, if she's called SUNfish, don't you think she'd be like a really pale gold? 16:19, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

That would be too presumptuous. Darkhallows advised me to make her gray to match th eonly decription we'll probably ever have of her from the manga at the end of Crookedstar's Promise. And we can't go by names for descriptions. Have you seen Tawnyspots? How he got that name is an enigma. 16:52, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart near the tip of the earpink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:26, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see it, but whatever it is it isn't blurred lineart. I don't touch the lineart, I work under it. 20:13, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and round it; it looks a bit flat. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:44, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading tons except on the tail-- 03:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks darker than the rest of the body. Lighten it a bit. 13:59, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the shadking thicker. 15:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is a little too blured on one side but other than that great job! 20:52, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the highlights. 00:42, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did all suggested above (though most of it was the same thing repeated over and over again by different people), basically redid the shading completely. Still think she looked like a short furred cat in the graphic novel, but I digress. 01:19, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better! Blur the neck and back shading. 22:35, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, changes not showing yet. Blurred it literally as much as it would go. Anything else? 22:56, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if its my computer, but the base of the tail seems to have some waste near it. Also, lighten the front paw. 00:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, got rid of any waste I could find, lightened front paw. Changes not showing yet. 16:22, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights on the muzzle, it almost makes it look like she has a graying muzzle. This is looking great! ^^ Keep up the good work! :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

It looks like there's some black or dark gray mixed with the ear-pink. Blur the shading around the head and darken/add some shading under the chin. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:08, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened shading under the chin more (though I'm betting another user gets on to tell me to lighten it again) and got rid of the shading in the ear. 20:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more triangular. 23:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:09, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Minnowkit (CP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
First Image! Excited! Anyway, it didn't mention her eye color, so I made it blue. Any comments?

Darken the shading tons, please. It seems there isn't any there. 04:24, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Not sure if the changes are showing yet and I'm not sure if I darkened it enough. I darkened it, though!

<font color="#66ffff">The Stars Align <font color="#66ccff">Twilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO! <font color="#bebebe">Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango* <font color="#bebebe"><font color="#66ccff">Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 04:51, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye highlights on the same side on both eyes so she doesn't look cross eyed. --Frosted Apple 10:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed Eye Highlights. (Not sure if changes are showing, yet.)

<font color="#66ffff">The Stars Align <font color="#66ccff">Twilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO! <font color="#bebebe">Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango* <font color="#bebebe"><font color="#66ccff">Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink, darken the shading, brighten the highlights; the shading looks a bit flat. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:22, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Lightened the ear-pink, darkened the shading, brightened the highlights. Not sure if changes are showing, yet!

<font color="#66ffff">The Stars Align <font color="#66ccff">Twilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO! <font color="#bebebe">Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango* <font color="#bebebe"><font color="#66ccff">Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 16:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The earpink on this -> side looks darker than the other one. 20:18, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eye color a tad, looks great ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:06, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, and blur the chest highlight. 22:20, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Uh, I did all of the above. Just wait for changes to show, (If they do.) The Current Version should have a lighter ear-pink on > this side, and brighter eye coloring

Blur the chest highlight more. 22:38, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred it. Just wait for the Changes to show! <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  23:10, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are some pixels on the tail that arev lighter than the rest. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 11:54, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. 12:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-UploadedI fixed the tail. Wait for changes to show! ;)<font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  16:19, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, nice job! Define the earpink. I can barely see it. 14:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

And fix the waste below the tail and the little dot of waste above the ear. 18:08, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed! ;) <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  01:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's still some waste. Make sure to get rid of all of it. 23:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed, just wait for changes to show <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  15:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a gray nose 20:32, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the tail shading. 15:25, September 1, 2011 (UTC)]

Also define the earpink. 22:40, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed! Wait for Changes to show! ツ <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  00:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

How'd you do that smiley face? xD Anyways, make the earpink more visible. 17:16, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing from when I updated it before, as I gave her a gray nose and defined the earpink. If, after it updated, then the earpink needs to be defined, I'll work on it.. 19:22, September 2, 2011 (UTC) (Wasn't logged in at the moment) Changes are showing now...

They are? There's some waste near the tail. 23:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (W) ~ For Approval
First charart so it may be a bit shaky, but what do you think? Mi st  y!  04:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

This will have to be redone sadly, you need to get the full sized blank. Make sure to click the image, THEN save/copy it to use it. Sorry. D: ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:53, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry :3 Should I just remove all of this? Mi st  y!  05:02, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that the right size? Mi st  y!  06:29, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yep! Blur the shading please. 06:35, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are the changes showing? Mi st  y!  06:46, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Not yet. XD Give them a few hours and it should show. 06:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the front leg and eye, blur shading, enlarge highlights, make earpink more triangular.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 08:59, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should brighten the eyes a bit. They look almost black. 12:15, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are definitely not showing xD Mi  st  y!  17:48, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

There, now I think they're showing. Mi st  y!  21:00, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Where's your light source? Keep the shading consistent and smooth, and add some along the haunch. See one of the tutorials for the correct shading source. Other then that, smooth out the highlights, and blur/triangularize the earpink some ;) 22:25, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, but whats a light source? (sorry first charart Dx) I use Mousetalons tutorial, is that an okay one? I blurred and made the earpink more triangular, and what do you mean by smooth out the highlights? (sorry >.<) Mi  st  y!  22:38, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

A light source means where the light is coming from. For example, if the light is coming from the left side, the left side will be brighter than the right side. If the light is coming from the right side, then the darker side will be the left side. Smoothing out the highlights means to blur them and stretch them out more. 23:15, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

And rename this as Voleclaw.warrior.png. Its case-sensitive. 23:42, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the highlights as much as I could.. And added some shading along the haunch. Is it okay? >.< Mi  st  y!  01:08, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the tail highlight on the left side, near the top. It's not supposed to be on the tip of the tail. Man, I'm bad at explaining things.. xD 12:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moved the highlights, is that alright? The changes aren't showing (sorry that I keep on saying that xD)

Blur the highlights, shading, and earpink. Good job! 21:00, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Blurred the highlights, shading and earpink more. And Thanks :3 Mi  st  y!  21:17, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Try to darken the highlights so they don't stand out as much. Lookin' good! 06:31, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are the changes showing for you? Mi st  y!  07:01, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Don't worry though. With the amount of images this wiki has, changes may take some time to show up. 07:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think the changes are now showing, can you see them? Mi st  y!  01:33, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

There is a sort of streak of highlight extending from the face highlights. Can you get rid of it? 14:03, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Oh, and (sorry I didn't catch this until after I published) there is blurred lineart all over. Can you fix that as well? 14:05, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Sure, but I'll have to hold that off until my internet comes back, (using a differnet computer) is that alright? Mi st  y!  19:28, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How does it look? :3 Mi  st  y!  02:26, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, and blur the chest a little. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  19:03, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think it should be lighter gray, because Voleclaw is not dark grey. Also some of the shading needs to be blurred. Stoneclaw33 12:35, August 30, 2011

Sorry, I'm kind of new at this.. BUt any tips on how to lighten the whole thing?? I use pixlr.com. (sorry >.<) Mi  st  y!  20:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Use the dodge tool, I think, or redo it. 23:22, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the whole thing, making it a lighter gray. (changes are not showing) But if you don't like, I still have the old image on which I could just use the dodge tool on. Mi st  y!  02:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur over the shading and smooth it out; it looks really blotchy. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger. 22:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading and made the highlights bigger, though I'm having trouble with the shading on the back. >.<

Sign with 4 ~s. If you'd like help, you can always ask. :3 00:39, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oops! Sorry 'bout that. I would like help with the shading x3 Mi  st  y!  00:56, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll help! :D 00:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! :D Mi  st  y!  00:18, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I redid the shading for you, but the changes aren't showing yet. I also renamed it correctly. Check the second file on the file page to see my version. If you don't like it, you can revert it to your version. :D 00:23, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! And what tutorial do you use? xD Mi  st  y!  07:09, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. :D And, I used Nightshine's tutorial at first, but then I just began doing things my own way. xD 07:14, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 01:51, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How does it look? Mi st  y!  03:47, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more like a triangle by just smudging it slightly. Then I would smudge the edges of the earpink or blur it depending on artist's preference. Darken the eye color, and you may want to airbrush the edge of the highlights so make them smoother or blur them. Nice work. :) 03:54, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks ^-^ Is that okay? Mi st  y!  05:25, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Mmhm.. Make it more triangular, more pointier xP -- 05:33, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing :P Mi  st  y!  16:23, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blurthe edges of the chest hightlight, then it will be ready for CBA. 20:27, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that good? :3 Mi  st  y!  21:36, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight. Eh, me commenting on something that I started. ;P 23:06, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it okay now? Mi st  y!  00:08, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Harrykit(Ki)-For Approval


The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:45, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I moved this to the bottom of the approval section for you. Please keep that in mind next time. 06:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the blotch of shading on his shoulder/ face. Other than that, looks good. 13:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, there's no light source. Look at this on how to do shading. 22:34, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:42, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 05:14, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and make the ear pink more triangular. :3 Mi  st  y!  07:31, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are too light; darken them a bit. 23:17, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 15:48, August 31, 2011 (UTC)'''

Rename this "Harrykit.kit.png" 20:45, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 00:47, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded.The name can be changed when it will be approved.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:44, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

It won't be aprroved until yu re-name it i think. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:46, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

But if is to rename-it ,it show two options:change the name,or the original image.This is the original image:

.cries The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 15:36, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Just change the image dear, It's fine, I'll show you changes, and if you don't like the way it looks, you can revert it back ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 20:49, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose. Moonstorm88 10:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (A) - For approval
Since one image is declined and one is withdrawn, I made this one. Comments? 22:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  22:47, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you. :D Blur the shading. 23:30, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his white body and make sure there's shading on his farther hind legs away from us. I hope that makes sense... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make his back paws black too. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:47, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shade his underbelly. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 04:08, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks fine. Just darken it a tad. 23:50, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:54, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

The changes don't seem to be showing. 06:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Give them some time. When there are a lot of images, sometimes the changes don't show. 06:05, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink just a bit more :3 Mi  st  y!  03:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Blur the haunch shading a little bit. 14:06, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink. 23:21, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and round out the shading on the white areas. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:31, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:41, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more on the white areas. Don't be afraid to make it look a bit gray. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:05, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Whitefang (A) ~ For Approval
This will be the 35th image after what needs to be archived has been. Comments? 09:29, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

looks great but the stripes on his tail look kinda odd. and the earpink is a little hard to see. But great job!^^ 19:34, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - But as usual the changes aren't showing yet. I defined the ear pink and tidied up the tail, so that the stripes are consistent and fit better with his warrior image.. 20:32, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. You did really good in matching my image. The only thing I can think of is make the ear pink about a pixel larger. Excellent job! 23:24, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

The edge of the paws and the white color looks messy. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:40, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I tidied up where the white meets the brown on the paws, however the changes aren't showing yet XD 08:20, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing, it's the second one down. 21:15, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and add a highlight to the tail. 23:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  08:16, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch the highlight further up on his face. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:32, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 15:03, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the head highlight bigger, and blur the haunch highlight. 00:44, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded (But the changes aren't showing) 10:26, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Assuming I'm looking at the right one.... You need to lighten up the shading on the tail. It makes the fur look darker then his warrior charart. 23:58, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, too. 00:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded After this I cannot honestly define the ear-pink anymore. 11:29, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the brown and white meet on the hind legs. 01:23, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Whitefang.apprentice.png. 04:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to bug you about earpink (though it doesn't have to do with defining it), but blur the bottom of it. 00:14, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded & Renamed  10:09, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlihgt on the head. 23:02, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Magpie (Lo) - For Approval
I love this style of black and white. So, what do y'all think? 00:29, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the white a bit and lighten the black. 00:30, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black so we can see teh shading more, and define the shading on the white parts -- 00:34, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Derp. I forgot ear pink. Also, pelt lightening and shading defined. 00:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Note: Changes don't show. It's the second one down. 00:47, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights. 23:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the musdged parts a little more. I know it looks pretty and all, but blur it a little. (I really hope I'm seeing the right one...) 00:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Meh. 01:27, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Like I put on Piper's loner image, I realized that Soot was the only one who we saw older, and this might be declined because of it. I don't want it to, but it might :/ 17:22, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I kind of agree, since he wasn't actually seen as a loner, he might not get one. Lets wait for a lead's opinion, though. 00:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

But, he was mentioned in the book. We've made chararts for those mentioned, and not seen. Blackstar as an apprentice, take for example. As well as Barley as a kit. =P 00:45, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Good point. Honestly, I really don't know, since it didn't say that he was a loner, and he didn't have an apprentice name or anything. And, Barley had a whole story about him and his sister as a kit. XD 23:51, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

He was over six moons old. The loner charart is for any loner (even if they used to be a kit) over six moons old. And the story wasn't about Violet and him as a kit. They were over twelve moons old when that story took place; far older then a kit. 23:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the beginning was. Anyway, I want this to get approved, because, well, its pretty. ;) So, since it might, you should probably lighten the highlights. 00:01, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Misty. And for the umpteenmillionth time... I do NOT use highlights. >.> I did, however, try something else. 00:06, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the chest and belly. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 22:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:47, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the black a bit more, define the highlights, and there's still some waste around the chest, belly, and between the hind legs. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:39, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, for crying out loud! I DO NOT USE HIGHLIGHTS. I'm getting tired of saying it..... I'll go fix the rest now, though. 03:44, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is the correct one. 03:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay if you dont use highlights, brighten the entire image and darken the shading. Gives the same look. 03:53, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I brightened the entire image, and re-did the shading. There's almost no shading on the paws, chest and tail, but it IS there. I just lightened it up because it made them look gray instead of white... Look here for the most recent one. 05:10, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

There is shading waste next to the chest and underbelly. 17:22, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

...the changes aren't showing on the page. The one you see up here is NOT current. However, I did notice some gray with the current image, so I fixed it. 17:27, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 23:00, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (R) - CBA
Er...this isn't my best one. 00:27, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ive circled the areas, the red circling indicates that the tabby thing needs to be darkened. some areas are a bit too pale.

00:32, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

darken the shading a bit -- 00:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur where the ginger meets the white? This looks epic, btw. 00:51, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Pearls, thank you, but I really didn't need that. I would have needed it if I had asked, and uploading that caused clutter. Thanks Cloudy. 01:45, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Down on the flank, the ginger part looks like it's a different color, I don't think it's from the shading, could you correct that? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:21, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's went I intended to do. ;) Hopefully that's alright? 21:51, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and lighten the back a bit. 23:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ginger meets the white. 23:44, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The front part of the big patch on her back needs to dip down a little bit further where it's close to her front leg/arm 05:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? o_o 16:12, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Look at her warrior. They are facing the same way. There's a big dip in her ginger tabby patch that nearly touches her arm- you have it smooth and going up much farther 18:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the ginger tinge on the base of the tail. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:44, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Add visible stripes on her front leg. 00:02, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes aren't showing. I fixed the ginger patch but I'll do the stripes and ginger later. 00:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 22:56, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can find nothing wrong with this image. CBA? 22:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Q) - For Approval
Yes, since a few things are archived i am now allowed to post this. Anyway, Comments?



00:28, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit. Sorry, Pearl, this will be declined. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:40, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It was under the limit before, Seems like someone made it over the limit, Apologies. 20:56, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think it was because you, Icestorm and I all put our images up at the exact same time. Sorry, Pearls. =( 23:49, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

But Hey! you can always re-post it once any of these get approved! 8) -- 00:11, August 30, 2011 (UTC) I guess this can stay up. Take the ear pink off the farthest away ear. 00:50, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, Changes arent showing. 21:01, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be black. 23:02, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done, Changes arent showing. 23:14, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Mitzi_(Lo).queen.png. 01:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the face up a little it is hard to see her mouth and whiskers. Other wise great job! 20:23, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, Changes arent showing. 21:19, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading ever so slightly. Looking good, Pearls! 02:16, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Changes arent showing 00:04, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the front paw shading/highlight. 00:39, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'd Like to withdraw this, for the moment, i'll keep it reserved due to the fact that i'm gonna be camping, Sorry guys! 21:18, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind that, They have wifi 21:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC) 21:24, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Did you re-Upload it yet? 22:13, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks very good. But I mostly say that about everything. XP. There is some waste above her back (near her neck). 22:57, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ~ Small tweaks Pearls wanted me to do. Very minor. ;) 00:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks atelda, Anyway the fair has been pushing my scheduals around, so i might not be able to work on this. 02:28, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Then are you withdrawing it? If not blur the shading. 03:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. i figured everything out, Sorry atelda -- 17:03, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) ~ For Approval
I don't really like this image much, but here he is. Any Comments?

Stoneclaw33 12:29 August, 30th 2011

Dethumbed it. Blur the earpink and highlights. 20:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink a bit bigger and triangular, then blur it. :3 Mi  st  y!  21:05, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, and the highlights on the haunch and shoulder. If you didnt, shade and highlight the Herb, because i dont really see it on my laptop. {User:Fallenstars/Sig} 21:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

give him a pale belly. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 23:00, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The herb color looks a little bright, perhaps darken it. Once you do, add shading to it. 23:11, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Rename this Mudfur.mca.png 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Changes aren't really showing except for the earpink and herbs. Stoneclaw33 05:52 August 30, 2011

There is a bit of white on one of his back paws, can you fill that in? Mi st  y!  01:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Mudfur.mca.png. 01:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- I filled in the little white bit of white on his hindlegs, renamed him and gave him a pale belly Stoneclaw33 08:23 August 31, 2011

The shading still needs blurred a lot, and give the herbs some depth. 21:30, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a bit, too. Mi st  y!  00:26, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate it a bit, so that it matches his Medicine cat image. 15:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink, and blur the shading. 00:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a couple days. Just letting you know that you need to work on this or it will be declined, ok? 20:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Changes aren't showing much exept the shading, I blured the shading Stoneclaw33 5:41 September 5, 2011

Darken the shading on the pointed shoulder blade on our left. 22:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade(Lo) ~For Approval


So here she is....People did this vefore, so I don't see why I cant, Once Fleck is withdrawn, this will be number 35. I took all colors from her Warrior image, this ish my first image....so comments? 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

NICE x) blurr the earpnik, smudge where the white meets the brown, and define the stripes -- 00:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She looks miscolored, take the colors from her warrior image. 00:09, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I did, sweetie, it is just I shade and highlight differ than Mosspool. I use Pixrl, I think she uses Gimp, thats all ;)

Anyway; Reuploaded. Thank you, Blueorca^^ changes aren't showing. (I think I need to blur the stripes, don't I?) 00:21, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Extend the stripes a little butm and blur them some on the legs. 00:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Butm? And this is the same stripe style on her warrior image. 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

The white from her tail is too far in, blend it a little better. -- 00:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * bottom, xD, sorry. 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She has a bit of white on her haunch on her warrior image, so I did that here. Or do I get rid of it?.... 00:56, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the warrior image is facing left, and loners face right, so they don't have to match that much. Blur the earpink, darken the shading, lighten the highlights, and blur them a lot. 01:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It just looked weird to me, but whatever. Define your light source so that it falls over the high and low parts of her muscles. 01:25, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think the white on her should be just a bit lighter.. So that we can see the shading and highlights. Mi st  y!  01:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? 03:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a bit more ;) Mi  st  y!  04:10, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a patch on her front leg/arm closest to us 05:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It isn't the same style as her warrior image. Splashpelt is correct. Extend the stripes or re-do them. 20:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll re-do it.(Well the stripes anyway. ;)) 23:18, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows that? 00:15, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

better. Blur the stripes, and it looks kind of 2D. Try using the regular loner shading (See Fleck's loner version under this one.) 00:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Due to the fact, my sister, Flowerpatch isn't on, I want to point this out; Ivystripe uses Gimp, Flowerpatch Does not. Therefore, she can't match the shading, sorry. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:40, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The fact that I have GIMP has no impact on that. I practiced doing the shading and looked at how loners were shaded, on the high parts of theit bodies you just don't add shading, and on the really low points you add extra shading. I could do it without layers. 14:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match her warrior image. Even if you and Mossy use different programs, you can still match it. 16:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Dips head* Okay, I will see what I can do. And Sis, Maple. We BOTH know, I hate it when you try to help me, and I've told already, to NOT comment on any images I do. Lets face it, you hate me, and I hate you. 22:20, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

All programs use the same basic tools, so you should be able to. ;D I use pixlr, and it works just fine. And, try to get along for the sake of PCA. :P I'm sure that if one of you was falling off a cliff, the other would save them. Lol. 23:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sis, Changes are showing now, darken the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:58, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * sighs* Fine fine, I'll try....anyway, Reuploaded, I tried to match the shading style. Changes aren't showing. 13:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think she has ginger on the front leg away from us, or on the back paw either. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, forever <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> flying 17:20, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you dont see the parts i added ginger to, so i did it anyway, she seemed to have more White than ginger, so I added more ginger. 17:28, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh hey, wow, changes are showing, what are the odds? ;) 21:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs farthest from the viewer 21:26, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:24, September 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * gigles* Is the image so good, you can't find a thing wrong with it? Is this why it lacks comments? ;) 02:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back leg seems a lot darker then the rest of her. I suggest lightening it. 03:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad on the white areas. 03:47, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Flower :) Right where the tail starts, where the ginger is, there seems to be a bit of color lighter than the rest of the ginger. 03:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gunger meets the white on the mzzle. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:43, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wow I can't type. -.- I meant Ginger, and Muzzle. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  08:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To make it more consistent, Move the left back leg patch to the top, take the patch on the left front leg off, and make the right front leg patch wrap around the leg. Moonstorm88 11:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, can you explain that? Like dumb it down. Not that I'm dumb! I'm dislexic, so is my sis, and she can't firgure out what you mean, so can you explain it for me? 13:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, is that what you meant? 00:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The changes probably aren't showing. What I meant was to make the back leg behind the pointed one put the patch on the other half of her leg but take the other one off. On the front leg, the one behind the pointed one, take the patch off. On her other front leg, make it so it looks the patch goes around her whole leg. Sorry for the confusion. Moonstorm88 01:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. Thanks, me and My sis, Flowerpatch, HATED the fact we couldn't figure it out, and it should be like... the....sixth one down, i think. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fleck (Lo) - For Approval
Ok, I can finally post Fleck! I've had this done but didn't want it to be declined while on vacation. I modeled him after a "classic" tabby since a lot of ginger cats I've seen have this kind of marking. Also, I'm thinking the white on the insides of his legs should probably be removed. Comments? 01:21, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

And to Ivyheart, I'm sorry that I'm not just using your image, but I've been working on this for a while :( 01:23, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ivystripe, it's totally fine. Seriously! Ok this is amazing- blur the top patch-things of ginger, you know, on the back. 01:36, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blurr the shading some more, and desaturate the earpikn just a bit-- 23:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ginger meets the white on the belly, and lighten the shading a teny-tiny bit. This is wonderful, Ivystripe! I have to say, I think this is the best one I've seen from you. 02:14, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and thanks, I do appreciate it! 03:50, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I think your Squirrelflight is my favorite, but this is awesome, too! Define the earpink, it blends in with the pelt too much. 00:33, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded And personally, I like Running Horse best :D 02:52, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

This is totally awesome! I like how you did tha tabby but anyays lighten the shading on the tail. It looks uneven and too dark. 20:07, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't want to lighten the shading too much, but it can be lightened a little more if it's still too dark. 20:32, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading/highlights to the tail. 22:09, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded haha I was just told to tone it down. 22:15, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it needs to match the other shading/highlights. xD Blur it, now. 23:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just smudged it in a bit. How's this? 00:27, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight go farther down the tail. 03:42, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and it's not a highlight, but that's ok :P 16:16, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? 01:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlight. 22:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and again, those are not highlights. I believe I only used highlights on his shoulder and haunch. 00:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Echomist (W) - CBA
I couldn't really see how to do the strpes since I never saw Paleclaw's image, and Iceheart made her's smudged and stuff, but um, here's mine. Comments? :3 01:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Edge her fur in white to match the description. 01:34, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This looks stunning, Rainwhisper! Define the shading just a tad on the front leg farthest from us. :) 01:39, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing, Rainy! Can you make the ear pink a tad bit easier to see though? 02:03, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the head highlight too. :D 02:27, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. :) Shade the right (the cat's right) front leg and back leg. 02:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is fantastic! Blur the shading a tad. 15:25, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Shellheart, I made it so it would match Iceheart's. 20:58, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Now, define the earpink a bit. It kind of seems like the whole ear is pink. ;D 00:31, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I really like the stripes! Make the Ear-pink a little smaller and blue the front leg a little bit. 22:07, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

^stripes..? Eh, anyways earpink is fine, just define the edges a bit -- 01:44, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant uh...mottles or flecks I think. xD Blur the tail shading. 12:30, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 13:53, September 3, 2011 (UTC)'''

You said something about stripes. Meh. Highlight the muzzle juusst a tad more. 00:44, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't put highlights on the muzzle. 02:39, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading ever so slightly? Other then that, I really can find nothing wrong with this image. I think it's ready for CBA, but, I'm still new with the SW stuff. XD 06:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 01:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)'''

CBA? 01:29, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt the CBA, but the front paw farther from the shading side needs to be darkened. 22:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

No, it doesn't. The light is supposed to be hitting it like that. 22:53, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. Continuing CBA. 23:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I've been waiting quite awhile to fit this in. I'm sorry that I had to post this right after Piper got approved, but Icestorm told me she approved it and I couldn't resist xD Sorry to all who have been waiting long to post their charart too ;-; Anyways, comments? 00:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can hardly see it 00:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

More highlights, and lighten th ear pink. Nice job! 01:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks fine. Just define the shading/highlights alot -- 03:04, September 3, 2011 (UTC)m

Reuploaded. Don't know if the changes are showing or not. @Sandstorm - I don't use highlights, and they aren't required ;D 03:09, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 04:44, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not show. 16:20, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading alot more (think thats the only problem here XD) -- 17:56, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten (or add if you don't have any XD) the highlights a bit. This looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:56, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes seem a bit darker that those on the elder charart. 16:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To Paleclaw, she doesn't use any, but I think they would help if she is willing to do them. 00:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the whole thing and made it lighter. Also I added highlights. Not a huge fan of the shading though. 00:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I love the shading, Splashpelt. CBA? 01:14, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

You didn't change the name, So i did, I hope I don't get in trouble.... 01:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

No, its okay; I do that all the time. :P Sorry, but the haunch shading still needs to be blurred more. 22:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (Ki) ~ For Approval
Ok, this will be the 35th. Hope you like it! 21:04, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely epic. okay, define the shading some, and thats all I see -- 21:06, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the brown parts a little to match the other images. 21:08, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Also lighten the white too though. The colors on here are a bit darker than her warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:27, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reploaded. Thank you guys ^_^ Changes aren't showing. 22:03, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the earpink a tad? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">evil incarnated 12:47, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I doubt the changes are showing. 23:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Bee-u-ti-ful! Just define the ear-pink, looks great, Ivy! 02:39, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink as well. But just a little. This is amazing! 03:43, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Aww. The kit looks purdey :3 Define the highlights. And the ear pink. 07:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kind of like a tabby make it more like a tortie. And also make the white on the front legs taller and on the back leg make it cover the whole leg. Moonstorm88 11:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

She made the whole back leg white. You cant make it bigger and then it would go onto her side. And the sides do look a little bit tabby.. . 12:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

You guys, I only copied it to look like her warrior image. 14:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, made earpink bigger, and did I define it enough? I don't think I should change the way she looks because I was copying her warrior image. 14:21, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. 15:13, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you could blur the colours a bit more, so people don't think it looks tabby. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 16:18, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the eyes a bit. The approved warrior art has her eyes slightly lighter. Otherwise, gorgeous. Very well done. 16:29, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Thanks Shellheart.

Gorgeous, Ivyheart! The only thing I see is maybe make the white a bit more white, it looks more gray than white. Other than that, it's amazing! Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 22:12, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Thanks, peeps. I appreciate all of your compliments. 04:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is Beautiful, Ivyheart! Good job Ivyheart! Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 20:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit smaller and blur it ;3 21:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white paws, and define the shading. Looks great! 22:50, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Here's Tigerheart! I wanted to do this way back in like May, but Sandstorm beat me to it. :P Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

He needs some more stripes on his tail, it looks weird with only the few. 00:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not just on his tail, everywhere. But stunning job, Paleclaw! 00:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree it looks weird, but this is exactly the stripes he has on his Apprentice alt, is it Ok to change them? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Alts. don't need to be the same....XD 10:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the tail shading. 22:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I thought if they were described the same, btu in a different rank, the images had to match? Oh well, that means I can go crazy with the stripes! 8D Anyways, changes aren't showing yet. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:53, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (KP)~ For Approval
Comments? 00:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on his collar. Beautiful work! 00:20, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Are you looking at the right one? Second in the history, i redid it. 00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oooh GORGEOUS! Blur the dark brown on the shoulder and tail juuuuust a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 18:04, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add some brown or dark ginger (whatever that dark orange color is :P) to the face 23:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki)- For Approval
This was supposed to be here because Cloud is withdrawn. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:18, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we weren't allowed to do that? Post a charart before the images are archived. I may be wrong, but I just thought one of the leads said that atsome point...... *shrugs* Anyways, fi it stays up, redden the earpink a bit and make it bigger. Looks great! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw! I edit conflicted with you 3 times over this. This will be declined and im tired of typing out why. 00:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Icy! XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But I was editing the same time as you, and Lakestream(?) is supposed to be approved. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:32, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is over the limit until something is acutally archived. 00:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's exactly 35 images. I just archived Lakeshine. 00:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. But for future reference, please don't post until the conflicting image is archived. Voleclaw needs a gray nose. 00:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything. 00:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, sorry but there was only 34 when I uploaded but I guess Iceheart beat me to it. :) Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  01:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. 22:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Willowkit (Ki) - For Approval
Comments? 03:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the belly. So cute! 03:56, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! :3 Looks awesome Atelda! Blur the earpink just a teeny bit. 10:59, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 22:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

desaturate the earpink a tad -- 00:15, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Brightsky (W) ~ For Approval
Ugh... Major Fail on the stripes... Ya'll know where to find the changes. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not a total fail.... Enlarge the ear pink a few pixels, and blur where the ginger meets the white. 03:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :) Define the shading more. 04:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think I was looking at the wrong one. 04:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad, maybe make the gray parts a tad lighter. 11:30, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok,ok, it's good but that stripes are big and needs blurring. Or you can add some more thinner and lighter spripes. It's only one thing.. Leaf-storm,14:12, September 6,2011 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading on the tabby patches. 20:53, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The patches look flat; add more shading, and smudge the patches and blur the stripes. 22:40, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes...don't look like stripes. Just a bunch of squigglies and circles. 22:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay... Huge Revision. I just ended up redoing the whole thing. @Icy, I hope you don't mind me taking a leaf from your book and using your stripe pattern. xP <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look a lot better, but the patches still don't have mutch shading. 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 00:19, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Night (Q) ~ For Approval
So, I made Night as a kit mother. I hope it's good. Comments? 22:06, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Needs more mudstreaks. Try and make them look like her cave guard image, if you can. Blur the highlights as well. 22:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a grayish-black nose 22:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

VERY nice! blur the stomach highlight & make the mud streaks more realistic(smudge). Also add a few more smaller streaks like Skye said -- 22:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add more mud; smudge it, and define the shading. 22:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Didn't see the above comment 'til now. I'll define it. 22:56, September 6, 2011 (UTC) (Defined)

Make the mud streaks a little brighter. Other than that it's beautiful :3 23:02, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Brightened it. 23:13, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

She ish glowing for all the waste around her, ge rid of that, LOVELY image! ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the haunch. 23:28, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; I re-did the shading, so sorry if it looks different. 23:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (Q) ~For Approval
This is my first charart, please tell me what you think. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

1) De-thumbed it

2) Define highlights (assuming that they're there) 23:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights, make the noese black, blur the earpink, make the earpink longer, and darken the shading. 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

And when you darken the shading, blur it. 23:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, darken the nosepink, and recenter the earpink. 23:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make her look glossy 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. I know some users don't like using highlights, but since her description specifically says that she has a glossy pelt, they should be used here. Darken the earpink, and you don't really have to make the nose pink. Plenty of black cats have pink noses. Just make sure it matches the ear pink if you leave it as is. 00:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

When she says glossy, I think you just need to make her shiny. Maybe some white will help, but I'm not sure... 00:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)