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Quince (KP)- For Approval
I hope I'm not going over the image limit cuz if I am I'll take it down and put it up later. Well, here she is. How is she? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 23:10, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit. There are two discussions.--  Night shine   ♥  23:26, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

There are three discussions up so this in within the limit. Blur the shading and highlights more. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:38, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink darker. And add shading to the ear and paw that's not facing us. Icestorm 23:43, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops I didn't see that. Blur the highlights and shading.--  Night shine   ♥  23:54, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's this? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 00:08, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks magenta. Also, Blur the highlights and shading more. But this is good for your first one! Maplefern Carrying the torch... 20:52, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I redid the shading and highlights. Earpink too. This good? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 22:19, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

She should have a collar LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 00:21, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights more. Icestorm 17:07, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Her right arm seems too dark. Lighten it a bit--  Night shine   ♥  23:05, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I fixed the shading, highlights and arm. I'm having trouble with the collar. Any tips on how to make it on pixlr? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 22:33, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I suggust making the collar in paint then coloring it in pixlr. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:44, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I think it'd be easier to do it all in pixlr, but of course it's your choice. If you do it in pixlr just take the pencil tool on 1 or 2 pixel size, and just... draw the collar. X3 ♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 04:35, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad.  Saint Ice   ♣  02:10, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I just started over and made it a whole lot better. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:11, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's the collar look? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:20, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit thin and the tag needs to be smaller. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:22, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: thickened the collar.

The shading needs more blurring--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  00:40, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Try and copy the collar on the kittypet image. User:QuailflightTheCat ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ We are the World...05:43, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: blurred shading and fixed collar. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 15:13, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. Sorry but it dosen't look that.........natural. If you see what I mean? Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:53, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: better? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 16:24, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Listen, you're having some though time on the collar. Plus Quince was never a queen. i'd just do the kittypet version. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ We are the World...05:42, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, she was a queen. In "The Rise of Scourge" she had given birth to, Ruby, Socks, and Tiny, who later became Scourge. So yes, Quince was a queen. But, collars are hard to draw, especially on queen blanks. I agree with Quail, try doing her kittypet image if you like Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:46, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

K I'll try...-- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:17, March 2, 2010 (UTC)-- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 14:55, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:How'd this turn out? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:58, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, this is the first time I've critiqued on a Kittypet Blank, but I'm pretty sure the ear pink should be slightly darker (As Quince is a gray cat)... Otherwise, I think this is great! =D

Shistar Mai Talk Page 22:03, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: darkened ear pink. How's this? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 22:08, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I cant really see the earpink now. Choose a reddish color. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:42, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded: fixed eapink. Better? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 23:04, March 2, 2010 (UTC)'''

Blur the shading on the tail and back. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:29, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How does this look? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 02:29, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well...how's this look? HELLO? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:00, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Calm down, people will comment when they can and its only been a day. Add more shading to the haunch and blur the shading and highlights. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:59, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's been a little longer than a week, please work on this or it will be declined Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:11, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I have a question. I redid her and I was wondering if I had to add highlights or not. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 14:55, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

No you dont have to add highlights, but, you need more shading around the shoulder and haunch. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blended... and choosing a file name that doesn't consist entire of caps would be good. ✐S aN  dY  15:08, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐S aN  dY  22:27, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry it took so long. Better? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 23:11, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the shading more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:16, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

How's this? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 23:29, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, Moony, well... I just hope you realize that she has amber eyes, and also that the ear pink is brown. No means of being a downer. Brightmoon  The Sign of the Moon!  19:16, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Repuploaded: Fixed earpink. As for the eyes, they are amber and are supposed to be amber. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 00:31, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to br bigger. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Done!:)-- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 01:22, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) - For Approval


I'm back with a new charart! And (luckily) this one is about 1,000 times better then Icicle. This is 37 but 2 of the things were discussions so technically this is 35. I just want to say thatnks to Ashshadow for some great advice and help and to al of the turtorial authors, you were very helpful. Anyways, quistions? Comments? -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:11, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Saint Ice 23:23, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? i learned an important lesson for the next time I do a tabby:shade FIRST! Then you can do the tabby markings. -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:40, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I put it near the top again. The shading needs some more burring and the stripes need to be thickened a bit more--  Night shine   ♣  01:41, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

You're actually supposed to do the stripes before shading so that everything is shaded equally. In addition to what Nightshine said make the stripes a little longer. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:44, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Gah1 I accidentaly deleted the file! It migt take me a while but I'll get her back up soon.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:47, February 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm going to have to disagree Ash - I always do my shading first and use the burn tool to add stripes resulting in the same evenly shaded effect without the overblurred stripes because of trying to blur the shading. Anyway, this is good Artimas, just make everything more polished. Make sure there aren't gaps in the shading, so it looks consistent, and make your stripes a little thicker. ✐S  aN  dY  22:42, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I forgot about burning the stripes on. My comment only applies if you paint the stripes on. Did you check your recyling bin for the sandpaw file? Haikage Ash's Talk 02:25, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas, if you just save the image from this site (Right click the image above and select 'save as') then you can get it that way. For the image, I can't say much that the others haven't already said, so, yeah. ♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:34, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

You guys are life savers! I'll be back in just a minute. Hopefully.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'm back. i tried to do everything you guys said. How does it look?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:38, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are a bit too dark and I dont see that many stripes on her tail. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more.--Shaf Girl  03:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is this good?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:19, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone comment? Is this good or not? I'm sorry, I'm just really impatient and I can't wait until my first charart gets approved! :D -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:35, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes darker on the leg farthest from us. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:06, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Is this dark enough?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:00, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit SQUARE, was that on purpose? No hurt intended, but I think you should have the stripes move around the body. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:03, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't seem to get them circly. Is it ok like this? Sorry, keep in mind, this nis only my first charart.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:35, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, wow! Is this your first attempt at a tabby? If so, it's pretty good! (You should see my first attempt at a tabby. LOL. xD) But the stripes don't exactly resemble the ones on Sandstorm's Warrior/Queen image. Try making them a bit more curved, and make them like tree branches so they split off in differant places. See This page if you really can't get the hang of it. ^_^ Shistar Mai Talk Page 18:39, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I know that she's facing the other way in her warrior pic, but I think she has too many stripes. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:47, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I will work on that when I get home, I'm at school right now. ^^ -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:21, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Redone, is this better? I did less stripes and tried to make them curve more. :) -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:44, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit thicker. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:12, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:45, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

So...comments?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 00:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone please tell me: is this goo? Sorry, I feel like this has been up forever and no ones approving or ging help eather. I really need something to do. :P -- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 23:45, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

The colour isn't the same as her warrior image--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:51, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Are you talking about the stripes or the pelt? Because I got the pelt color from her warrior image and I burned the stripes on. -- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 01:01, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe color isn't right--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow and Sandy told me to burn the stripes on, should I make it darker? Sorry for all ther stuipid questions ^^ -- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 17:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

I was talking about shading not burning the stripes on. I think ther should be a bit lighter. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:26, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks, I'll work on that now.-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:58, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, done. Are these stripes better? I can't wait til this gets approved!-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:12, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still doesn't look right. Add shading around the arms and chest, not just the back--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     21:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think I had some shading on the lgs and chest but I added more. Is this good?-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 15:19, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:03, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I can kind of see the shading on the back, and you should blur it. Brightmoon  The Sign of the Moon!  19:18, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

I wasn't sure what shading you meant Ash so I blurred it all. Blurry enough? ^^ -- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:28, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry... But no. On the back, there is a distinct line where the shading starts. Sorry Artimas. Brightmoon  The Sign of the Moon!  23:21, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading and stripes need blending a little more. ✐S aN  dY  16:48, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred some more, I think it's good but for some reason, when its on pile it looks goodb but when I post it its all weird. Go figure. Anyways, is this better?-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:25, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge(KP) for approval.
Well... here you go. I know that Spottedsky reserved this earlier, but there was no CharArt (that I know of) for smudge yet, and it was reserved awhile ago, so, I hope this works out. So... comments?Jmiles 06:46, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Darken the shading, and change the file name. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 11:19, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh wait. You already have one image up for approval. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 12:04, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but the spots need to be bigger, and Maple's right, you have one up for approval already. I don't know much yet, but I think the senior warriors will decline it, or

something. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:14, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I thought someone already reserved this? O.o -  B-Day -Kitty!   :D  21:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Jmiles, this will have to be declined until your first image is approved. I think one of the seniors warriors will have to decline this. When your first image is approved, then you can put this up. Rain whisker  22:23, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, it said he was black and white, not black with white spots... Quoth the Raven, Nevermore  00:49, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It never said that he was black with white. It showed that in Cats of the Clans, but that book can't really be trusted as a lot of the characters in that book were done completely wrong. He's white with black patches, and it says that he has amber eyes, not blue. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:48, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

OK. White with black patches, amber eyes, darken the shading. Consider it done. As for having one image already up for approval, if you haven't noticed already, IT CANNOT BE APPROVED!!!! It was already reserved by Insane. Go up and see it if you want. Somebody please help explain all this reservation stuff and approval stuff on my Talk Page, because I'm really, really confused! Jmiles 19:06, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's fine. I'll decline the Mudclaw now. ✐S aN  dY  19:07, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! After it's declined, can I try Smudge again? And I wouls still like some explanation on my talk page, if it isn't too much trouble. Jmiles 19:15, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

You can continue working on him now, and I'll come and write what will undoubtedly turn into a rather long explanation (through no fault of my own) on your talk page. ✐S aN  dY  20:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry. I sorta died on the blur tool. I had a bad day. (my internet crashed twice and I have the flu)Jmiles 05:40, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, I'm sorry to hear that! Well, he looks better. But I would define the patches more, they look to blurred now. And also, add ear pink to the left ear Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look more orange than amber. Haikage Ash's Talk 15:41, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

OK, less orange eyes, more patch definition, and ear pink in the left ear. Got it. Jmiles 16:21, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changed the eye color, redefined the black patches. I was a little confused about where exactly to put the ear pink because of the angle that he was at. If it's the exact same image, tell me. My computer did not want to put this one on, and it kept uploading the old one. Jmiles 16:46, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I understand. My computer doesnt want me to upload the image period. As for your image, blur the patches a tiny bit more and his eyes still seem orange. Amber is a bit more golden. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:51, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay. I'll do that. Jmiles 16:59, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Still not quite amber... I think. I pushed the rate on the blur tool to 80%, and blurred the patches more. Once again, tell me if there's anything wrong with the image (I mean upload wise) Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 21:00, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

The eyecolor is fine now. Sorry when I took it out of thumbnail size it showed up under your first message. Imagewise, try to make the white a little less gray and darken the shading. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:48, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. OK, I got the shading darkened and redefined the white in his fur. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 02:08, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Instead of having his fur w/ black spots, make it more like less circular patches and clusters, and the eyes are a little too brown. Try using a reddish orange instead of a brownish one. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:43, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

When you say to make "more less circular patches and clusters", do you mean like a tortoiseshell, just with only 2 colors? I think I know what you mean, maybe. I can do the eye color thing though. <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 01:49, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think that's what she's talking about, so it's sort of like the style used here. Also, there's blurred lineart in various places. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   21:04, March 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Whoops, forgot to say that I think the patches are fine as they are now, though. :) -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   21:10, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay, I'll fix the lineart. But do I change the patches or not, because I really don't want to. <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 05:23, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think that the patches are fine. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   01:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

There is too much gray. Dark hallows 18:26, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I'll leve the patches as they are. Do you just want me to use dodge to get rid of some gray? <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 20:02, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Alrighty, I used the dodge tool to lighten it, amber-ed the eyes up, and fixed the lineart. <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 22:22, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

make the patches bigger, because they look a bit like spots. Though this is really good! Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:22, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the patches bigger, and also, you might see that you went outside the outline... Brightmoon   The Sign of the Moon!  19:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Can do, I'll reupload soon. Just got a lot on my plate right now. <font color="#FF3300" face="Copperplate Gothic Bold">Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 03:13, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (A)-- For Approval
Here is Owlwhisker as an apprentice! This is actually the 34th post if I am correct (cause I forgot what I counted XP).Comments? Concerns? Snowflight 1  Happy V-Day!!  19:27, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good, just darken his stripes a little and blur the shading on his back. insaneular   Talk  21:28, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened stripes and blurred back shading. What else? Snowflight 1  Happy V-Day!!  00:37, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten or brighten the ear pink because I can barely see it right now. Otherwise, this looks really good. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   17:59, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened earpink. It may take a while to show up (hasn't shown up for me yet XP). Is it too light? Icy- Thanks! -- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  01:35, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try making it a tad darker and make his tail stripes darker--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     06:44, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened ear pink and tail stripes. might be a while to show up.-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:08, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and blur it--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:02, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened and blurred shading. What else? Snowflight 1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

thinin the shading and blur it. And darken his tail stripes more, i can hardly see them. -- Icy Invading the fire 22:15, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

How would I thin the shading? Snowflight 1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:59, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. Add a stripe to the far ear--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:01, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is the ear stripe too faint? Snowflight 1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  00:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, darken it some more. This looks great!--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:30, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? Snowflight 1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:29, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Very good job Snowfeather! :D I couldn't have done better myself! (Well, obviously...) Brightmoon   The Sign of the Moon!  19:22, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudpaw (A) - For Approval
Ok what do you think? :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 20:00, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Shruggy. (: Darken the shading, and ear pink. Icy Invading the fire 20:18, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

You either erased the eye bit or used the tom blank. Other than that and what Icestorm said this is wonderful. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:49, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But you've made the shading a bit too dark, run the dodge tool over the whole image a couple of times Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:31, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hold on Icestorm said to darken the shading and you said to lighten it? And for the ear pink I used the one from the her warrior charart. And yes I used the tom one xD I'll sort out the eye with the shading when I know if I should lighten it or darken it :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:08, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it, darkening it would make her look even more gray than white Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 17:52, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfall, it needs to be lighter. Also, even though the color you used is from another of a cat's images, the color may not work for your particular image because of shading or other reasons, so I think that the ear pink should be darkened just a tad bit, too. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   21:15, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a little too gray. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:15, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Just run the dodge tool over the whole thing once or twice--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:03, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I hate to tell you this, but Snowbird never made an appearance in any book as an apprentice. Somehow it kept being put up on her article. Sorry, and I did check all possible books that she would be an apprentice. <font color="#8e322e">→ <font color="#96aeb6">Sky <font color="#96aeb6">feather  22:03, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Huh, that's kind of strange. I could have sworn she was listed as an apprentice in one book. Well, there are tons of white cats. This could be Frostfur's apprentice image, or you could even make it Cloudpelt's apprentice image so you wouldn't have to change the blank. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:15, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Skyfeather: Thanks for telling me that :) I think I'll make this Cloudpaw. I'll rename it when I upload a new one. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:34, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Does Willowpelt have an app image yet? This would be perfect... ✐S aN  dY  23:00, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Willowpelt's app image is up for approval. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:03, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. I am so stupid sometimes. I feel a little out of touch at the moment lol ✐S  aN  dY  17:21, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

There doesn't seem to be anything preventing approval on this image, besides the needed file name change.. Right color, shading's fine, it all seems fine. Comments before approval? I'll rename the image if and when it gets approved. Bramble 19:23, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the shading is a bit dark, he looks a little too gray to me. And to stay consistent with his warrior and deputy image, his eye color should probably be a lighter blue Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:31, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Blanks - For Approval


I've made these a while ago and now I finally get to put them up. Yay!--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:59, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

The back paw looks strange and the fur on the back can go.  B-Day -Kitty!   :D  00:04, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just my computer (Sorry if it is) but when I try to use the PaintBucket to fill in the main body (This applies to all the blanks) on Pixlr, the eye that is fully visible fills in as well. D= <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 00:08, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The paws are oddly shaped: They have an extra toe, or so it looks like. There are also visible gaps in the lineart in the eyes. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:11, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I made the backs unfluffy. I think it might be your computer doing that Shistar. On the front paws of cats they have a weird thumb-like toe thing. They have that on the Loner blanks as well. I hope that's what you were talking about.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:14, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Shigura: It does that on a lot of the blanks, I think it happened when Pixlr was updated or something like that. Nightshine: the back hind paw looks a bit flat, try bringing the front of it forward a little bit in a curve like the other hind paw. About the front paws, (on the loner blanks) I don't think there's an extra toe...I think that's a tuft of fur on the longhair blanks, so in my opinion I think that you should get rid of the extra toe. However, aside from those things, these look really good! I just have to say that I love the fur on the longhairs. :) -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   00:54, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed back paw and got rid of extra toe.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:16, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose shorter on the right than on the left. -- Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 01:26, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The back paw looks a bit too big, perhaps make it smaller? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:34, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made back paw smaller and fixed nose--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:59, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shoulder a bit more...subtle, I guess you could say. Right now it's just this sort of drop from the neck to the back.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  06:38, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The front paws look a bit like camel feet. Maybe make the foot round and then put the line in instead on individual toes. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:06, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

These are good. I could nevery make good blanks. The face looks a little square if you know what I mean. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 23:09, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed front paws and shoulder--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:16, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Would it be okay for me to comment? I think that the faces should be a little rounder. <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  02:20, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

The longhairs need more facial fur, and some fluff along the back. Dark hallows 17:02, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ignore my horrible redline (and blue... green). I'm using a touchpad xD.  Dark hallows 17:18, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Those are great. Night! However, the (what would be) belly (under the chest, past the leg in front, nearest to the haunch) looks a little tubby. make it curve inward, JUST A LITTLE! =) Crystals and Pearls *glimmer*  20:23, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made backs a bit more fluffy, lengthened back paw, added haunch, made front paws rounder, added fluffy cheeks and I attempted to fix the head but it looks strange to me.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:15, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

You're right. I think it's the placement of the eye that makes the head look strange. also make the nose a little bigger. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:19, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made nose bigger--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:52, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

The chest is jutting out a bit on the shorthairs. (Lol, I'm all for subtle anatomy.)--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:01, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made chest smoother--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:30, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

It has a bit of a flattened face, doesn't it? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 18:30, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the front back leg a little flatter in the paw area so that it doesn't look too round, but not pencil flat. Snowflight 1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  18:37, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

There are still gaps in the eye lineart. Fix those. <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  21:39, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made foot a bit more flat. Raven: What do you mean? --  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     22:58, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

If you use the paint bucket, the fully visible eye fills in, too. <font color="#000000">Quoth the Raven, <font color="#960018">Nevermore  00:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Which program do you use? I use MS paint and that never happens--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:58, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

That only happens in pixlr. I think the eye should be ok because the same thing happens with leader and kittypet blanks. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:00, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

(To Ash- the loner blanks do it, too) I think they look good. <font face="Papyrus">Raven <font face="Papyrus">Randomness!  04:33, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

The paws are still too big. Dark hallows 18:27, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made paws smaller--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:39, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I bet they're going to be approved. What will the eyes look like? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:41, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

They look a little fuzzy to me. ✐S aN  dY  18:48, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Here I'll re-upload the long haired male one--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:33, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:40, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Is the shorthaired female blank blurry, or is that just Expie (My computer's name)? <font face="Papyrus" color="#ffcc33">Raven <font face="Papyrus" color="#ff3366">Randomness!  01:28, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look blurry on my computer--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:54, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

All except the long haired male looks blurry to me. They still color in fine though. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:28, March 16, 2010 (UTC)


 * That's what it looks like on my laptop, too. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   19:52, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

I re-uploaded all the blanks. I hope it's not blurry for anyone now--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     03:40, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Their heads look a bit squashed, and the line where the head overlaps the ear should be a bit rounder. These are really good though! Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 02:30, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made head rounder. I'm still not sure of how I can fix the shape of the head. Any suggestions?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     19:57, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Try it like this -

And then the hind leg farthest from us looks kinda strange. Like that line shouldn't stretch that far Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:12, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thanks for the diagram! That's just what was missing! I fixed the head and far leg--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:29, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

These are so awsome! Now, the little line that overlaps the ear should probably be a bit shorter. And the line should start a smidge lower -  Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:44, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded adjusted ear thing--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:58, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:51, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto above--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:05, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Be patient, Nightshine :) Wait atleast five days or so before asking for comments. Add a line to indicate where the belly is, because the chest shouldn't automatically connect to the hind leg.  Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:10, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added belly--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:36, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (A)--For Approval
I love Poppyfrost. And Tortoiseshells. And the reason I put this up was because withdrew Leafdapple. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:20, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Do you use GIMP? Anyways, for the image, blur the spots and shading a tad more. Icy Invading the fire 23:24, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred patches and shading. I don't think the changes are showing up... Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:46, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the shading on the tail--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:16, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened and blurred shading. I also brightened the highlights. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 11:49, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be a little bigger and lighter. Otherwise i love it! Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:29, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Made earpink bigger. I don't think I should lighten it, but if you think I should, please let me know. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:22, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ginger on her head and add shading to her right arm--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Anyway, no, Ice, I don't use GIMP. I use pixlr. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 01:15, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the black parts more circular?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:19, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I've attempted. Does it look good? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 01:49, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened shading. I'm assuming you didn't mean on the back or chest. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 02:05, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I just meant on the back. But that's fine. Blur the shading now--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred Shading. Anyway, I realized I've reserved only tortoishells.... Maplefern Carrying the torch... 02:12, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Tail shading needs to be blurred--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred it as much as I could. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 14:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading on the tail, and this will be good :) Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:37, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred and darkened tail shading. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:42, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

blur the back shading. If it doesn't work, lighten it instead. -- Icy Invading the fire 22:10, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

It wouldn't really be shading then, and besides, above you told me to darken it. If people want me to still, I will. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:00, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Just take the small ginger strip under the black above her arm. once you do that I think she'll be ready. Haikage Ash's Talk 14:18, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (D) - For Approval
Hopefully this is better than Gorsepaw as a kit... <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 21:02, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

I know you were trying to make him like the leader image, but his upper body looks really empty without a tabby stripe there. Upper-left chest area, I mean.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:46, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... so what should I do? Do you think it'd be alright to slip in another stripe? <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 00:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes extend longer toward the chest and add another stripe on the neck and tail. Also darken the shading and ear pink--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Guys, I think Ashshadow had this reserved first Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:37, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops... another epic fail on my part. Sorry Ashshadow! D= <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 14:06, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I never reserved this so it's ok. Maybe you thought this was stonestar? Either way you should add him to your current projects. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:41, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I probably should. xD

So... would it be alright to slip in another stripe on the chest? (And yes, I just realized I forgot to blur the shading.. I'll do that soon. xD) <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 16:48, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Either that or make some of his stripes a bit longer. Darken the shading a bit too. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:52, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading then blur it. And make the stripes a bit shorter. Icy Invading the fire 20:58, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been working on this... There was a blackout and I lost all my work. >_>

But am I making the stripes shorter or longer? LOL. xD <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Gold; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Ring Ring Banana Phone! 23:10, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well he does have pretty long stripes on his leader version. Maybe just leave them that size and adjust the placement. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:17, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry for the delay... Pixlr was being mean yesterday. xD

But yeah, I blurred the shading, ear pink, some stripes... added a tiny one to the chest, and went over some lineart with a black pencil. ^_^ <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Gold; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;"> Ring Ring Banana Phone! 16:14, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

There's still a vacant place on his upper chest/lower neck area. But I may just be nitpicking about that. In any case, blur the existing stripes more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:41, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Mistystar in a Hat


It seems spoilers are unavoidable in this case, but I'm sure everyone knows by now that Mistyfoot suceeds Leopardstar as this has been confirmed for a while. We have had countless users asking to make her leader charart, some even attempting to reserve her and we are aware of what a popular character she has become. We've talked it over for many an evening an eventually decided that the fairest way to decide who gets to make her leader charart is to use the random factor. There will be an opportunity to sign up under this message and the 'winning name' (so to call it) will be generated using a random online generator. Insane has kindly agreed to oversee this and will video the selection so it can be ensured fair for everyone.

This event is mainly to avoid a mad rush of users fighting to add her to their current projects on the 23rd, and as my original idea of just reserving her before any of you wake up was rejected... ( ^_^ ) well, this is the best option and should hopefully prevent any arguments.

Note: This is a one time occurence due to the mass interest in her character and will unlikely be repeated in the future for any other character.

Well, anyway. If you have any questions feel free to ask me either here or on my talk page; I am writing this in Bramble's absence so posting on her talk page is not the quickest option right now.

Please post any comments and question above the line and sign with your signature only below the line if you wish to be entered. Thanks ✐S  aN  dY  21:04, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Haha, good luck everyone who enters. =D <span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:Blue; background:Black; border:0px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Shistar Mai Talk Page 21:07, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

^ I'm really proud of that charart, pleaasseeeeeeeeeeee can I do it? insaneular   Talk  21:58, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

When will the draw end? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:36, March 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * Oops, sorry guys, I forgot to put that in. The sign-up will end on the 20th, giving a week to do so, which also gives Insane time to do the draw. ✐S  aN  dY  09:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Good luck to everyone who enters. And, don't worry if you won't get to do her. They'll be plenty of leaders once the field guides, super edtions and new books come out. ;) Icy Invading the fire 20:57, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Good luck! I'm not interested in doing her xD. -- Dark hallows 21:27, March 14, 2010 (UTC) I want to add an entrie. It will be fun. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  17:16, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Just wanted to say that the drawing will definitely be on the 23rd, (since I can't get to my computer with the recording program from the 20th-22nd) and I'll post it around 3-5pm Eastern. In case anyone was biting their nails about it, lol ;)  insaneular    Talk  00:19, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Aww eastern time. I'll still be in school for a few hours--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:06, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm so excited!!!--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     22:05, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. My computer is being very contrary and I'm having some difficulties with the video... Long story short, the person who was chosen was..... *drumoll*... Sandwich989! If you want to see the vid, it's quite low quality so it's difficult to read the text (sorry) but it's here. Now I'm going to hide until I can read FE :)  insaneular    Talk  19:44, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


 * D. You know what I just realized? I thought the people who signed up had to draw a pic of Mistystar in a actual hat, and the winner got to do Misystar. But I get it now... anyway wow this is exciting! ♣Gaelic  Irish♣  19:58, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, that would have been interesting Sandwich, but the pic above was just a joke between Sandy and me. Congrats :)  insaneular    Talk  21:30, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Entries here:

Icy Invading the fire 21:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Echoheart 21:37, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

 N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     21:46, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

 B-Day -Kitty!   :D  22:09, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Iceyfang 22:27, March 13, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:44, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Maplefern Carrying the torch... 00:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

-- Vancou verpath  14:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mouse She asked me to add her as she's away ✐S  aN <span style="color:#330066;">dY  18:13, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

B a  t  w  i  n  g   ♣  21:58, March 14, 2010 (UTC)!

22:19, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:47, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  17:16, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

-- ♣Gaelic  Irish♣  22:03, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Brightfrost of SunClan...  12:52, March 19, 2010 (UTC) -- Moonpelt StarClan will win.... 23:46, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (W)- For Approval
This is Firestar as a warrior. Questions? Comments? Concerns? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 20:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

His pelt color isn't quite right and he looks very smudgy. Alos you need to define the tabby stripes on his back more. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:05, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Do you want me to make it darker? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 20:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Not exactly. He needs to be redder like this:. Yours is more orange. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:17, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I'm an apprentice here. How do I do that? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 20:27, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I say, to fill in the pelt color with that pelt color, (upload the image, open it, click the dropper tool, click the pelt, click your image, fill it in). Then do the tabby stripes with the same color as the tabby stripes on his leader image. Add shading, then blur it all together, then do the eye, shown here Icy Invading the fire 20:50, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like this? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 21:18, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. (: Just add ear pink, and blue the highlights. -- Icy Invading the fire 21:19, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is it good? This is my first ever pic. Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 21:23, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's good for your first pic. Just blur the shading. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:26, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I brightened it a bit as well. What do you think? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 21:58, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

The color is good but I cant really see the shading anymore. Also add a few stripes to the tail and blur all of the stripes more Haikage Ash's Talk 22:08, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make him more orangey? He pretty red right now--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:41, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made him more orange, brightened it, contrasted it a little, made the shading better. Questions? Comments? Concerns? Is it ready? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 21:11, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and shading. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:56, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the color isn't quite right, he looks too bright. Not the shading, just his general pelt color looks bright reddish orange Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 09:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too bright, the shading isn't blurred enough. Dark hallows 18:01, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Tha stripes and the shading are way off. Also the stripes are way to bright like Dark hallows said. And last the stripes look kind of....sloppy. But that could be my opinion. MooNPelT 02:48, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look as if you took the burn tool and used that for the stripes.  Echo -Wave   Hi kitteh!  13:37, March 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * Echopaw: There's nothing wrong with using the burn tool for stripes... Echostar: The shading needs blending and the stripes need neatening up and darkening. ✐S  aN  dY  16:36, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:24, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Princess (Q) For Approval
Ughh! I hate the collar. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:21, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the lineart on the collar thicker, the stripes more like the ones on her kittypet image. But I like this! Maplefern Carrying the torch... 20:37, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Color in her nose. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:51, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Just blur the shading on her back and the stripes need a tad more blending. Other than what Maple and Ash said, that's all you have to do. (: this is amazing! -- Icy Invading the fire 21:12, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! But asking (for reference) if we do a kittypet queen, do we need to draw a collar? Because some people do and some don't...-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 19:36, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well the only other kittypet queen we've ever done is Ashy's Quince, which has a collar. I would think so, it'd be kinda strange if her kittypet image had a collar and her queen one didn't Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:57, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Collars are evil. But, I think it looks better then before. Anyway, I colored the nose (can't believe I forgot that!) Blurred the back shading, and blurred the stripes a bit more. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 18:54, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the tail stripes a bit--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:27, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thickened tail stripes Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:34, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:46, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there are a few blank pixels on the back leg near the paw. That might just be the shading but I think they are just blank.-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 15:21, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if you can fix this or not but the collar gets thinner as it goes toward the back. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:01, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


 * The style of her stripes needs to be the same as on her kittypet version, these stripes look patched and ragged, but the ones on her kittypet image don't. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   22:50, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think these stripes are really nice looking.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     03:01, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm working on it, I promise :) Just gimme till tomorrow to reupload, I was reading Fading Echoes all day, and didn't get a chance to (Such a good book!) Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:58, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuplaoded: Personally, I like the second one a lot better. What do you guys think? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:49, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefur (A) - For approval
Evanphoto 22:26, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Just brighten the highlight on her haunch and blur the shading. Also, blur the ear pink a tad. -- Icy Invading the fire 23:09, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 00:18, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? Evanphoto 22:52, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit and blur the shading some more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:25, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:47, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think you blurred the ear pink to much because I can't see any or at least a little bit~ Moonpelt  StarClan will win.... 17:55, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 23:56, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

I still can't see the earpink. Darken it some. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:00, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 11:05, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (A) - For Approval
gar, I think I'm getting worse at charart rather than better. DX Anywho, constructments? insaneular   Talk  23:17, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nooo, Insane, your are getting better.. For the image, maybe add/darken the shading on the neck. And add shading to the paws, or darken them. -- Icy Invading the fire 23:28, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry for being lazy and not updating this. I just added more shading to the paws and the neck. I know the neck shading looks a bit odd but that's because he has a stripe going across his neck, and I didn't want to block it out too much. Is it okay? insaneular   Talk  00:22, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the arm stripes and blur the ear pink a bit more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:25, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Once again sorry for not updating quickly. Does it look any better? I had to do it in pixlr since I'm not at my computer with GIMP. insaneular   Talk  19:21, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on his legs, and this will be good :) Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:11, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Guh, couldn't see how much that last one failed on my other computer. I redid it with GIMP and I think the arm stripes look much better now... insaneular   Talk  19:30, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink a little and he'll be ready a mon avis. ✐S aN  dY  16:52, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? insaneular   Talk  02:24, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  19:34, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Dawncloud (A) - For Approval
Any suggestions? :> MelissatheInu 01:45, March 17, 2010 (UTC) MelJoInuChan

It's pretty good, but you forgot to color her underbelly, it should be brown like the rest of her pelt Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:56, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

There I fixed the belly. MelissatheInu 02:21, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

The eye needs to be fixed. See here or here to find out how--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     03:37, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

She doesn't seem to have any shading. Click on one of the tutorial links that Nightshine posted above, to see how to do shading Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 08:55, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

And the stripes need to be blurred some more. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire likes to PARTAY!! 16:40, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to fix the shading but it wouldn't let me.MelissatheInu 02:07, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

It's not that there was shading before that needed fixing, but there isn't any at all that I see atleast. If there is some there, then darken and blur it Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:47, March 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * The stripes look too regular and need to be a bit more varied. Also, there are big gaps where you haven't added any stripes so add some markings in and blur them all a little. Shading is needed as I can't see any. ✐S  aN  dY  16:39, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (A) - For Approval
First apprentice! Oh the failure. Anything to improve?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:38, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and arm stripes--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:42, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur the stripes some more, darken the Ear Pink like Night said and maybe darken the highlights on his tail. They look a bit bright. Either darken the highlights or the stripes there. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  09:31, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  22:22, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  19:46, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Foxheart (W)-For Approval
After I messed up on Yellowfang, I have decided to go for something a little easier. XD! X Comments? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:38, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred.

Reuploaded Not sure if it worked. Did it? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  17:05, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Not really. Maybe try lightening the shading a tad. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:35, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  19:41, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try blurring it more, mostly around the haunch and chest--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:23, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:19, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the midriff shading a tad bit more. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:25, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the midriff shading. XD Fawnstorm  The Dark Forest are rising...  09:29, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her haunch and largen the earpink a tad. Darken her shading. Also, her pelt needs to be a more orange colour. Right now it's red. Make it more like her deputy image: ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  16:33, March 20, 2010 (UTC) But I got the colour right from her deputy image. I don't see how it looks 'red'? I am doing this on my mums phone so I won't sign off. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  11:35, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her chest fur a lot. ☼ Misty ☼ Here comes the summer...  17:04, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope it now looks less red. Blurred all the shading. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  11:35, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. Nice job! Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  13:53, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any better? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:02, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred. If you use Pixlr, I can do it for you. If you use photoshop, or gimp, set the blur tool to %100. Dark hallows 17:19, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I use Pixlr. :) |How do I do it? It never seem to look any different when I blur it. Fawnstorm  The Dark Forest are rising...  12:58, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr is fail when it comes to blurred xD. So it won't blur more than that. I can do it in GIMP, if you want? Dark hallows 05:45, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  10:09, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - For Approval
My best eveh! My first kit also! How bad is she?  Echo -Wave   Hi kitteh!  00:07, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty good :) I added you back on the chart, but it's strange that you were removed... anyway. I would darken the ear pink a bit, and thicken and lighten the shading Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:09, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

It says on top if you are gone for a period of time you get removed anywho im on it!  Echo -Wave   Hi kitteh!  00:15, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I would redo the shading because... it doesn't relly look like shading. It looks like stripes on the side. Try redoing it or bluring it. <span style="color:red;font-family:Papyrus;background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;">Moonpelt 01:28, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Echo: if your using GIMP, I suggest clicking the blur tool and at the left, set it on too 100 %. And BLUR. Also darken the ear pink. -- SaintIce Happy Saint Patrick's Day 22:08, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is really dark, like Moonpelt said its looks a bit like stripes. Darken the Ear Pink, but this is good! Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  09:25, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded GIMP is awesome!! This is my best eveh!  Echo -Wave   Hi kitteh!  16:20, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ha, I agree. Shading needs to be thicken and blurred more. Another than that it's awesome. :) -- Ice Spring is here! 17:07, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Great! But the shading needs to be more spread away from the body, you kn ow what I mean? It's really close and dark near the edge opf the fur now but yopu need to bring it out some. Other then that its amazing!-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:54, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Stonestream (W)- For Approval
Comments? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  10:40, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the Ear Pink a bit darker. See the chart on Misty's Tutorial for the corredt Ear Pink. This is really good thpugh. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  13:01, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but you already have an image up for approval. Choose which one you would like to post. As for the image, the shading needs some blurring. Fawn, the ear pink looks fine to me, but maybe not to other people. -- SaintIce Happy Saint Patrick's Day 21:16, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Fawn, the earpink could be a bit darker. The shading also needs blurring. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:27, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changed ear pink and blurred shading. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  23:05, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Ice. I just though tit looked a bit light! XD! Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  09:23, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This may be an opinion but I think the ear pink takes up to much room it the ear ~ Moonpelt  StarClan will win.... 16:20, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

So should I make the ear pink smaller? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  20:02, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. There is also a light colored smudge on his chest. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:11, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changed the size of the earpink and filled in the lighter spot. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  10:25, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I like this a lot! CBA? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:01, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar (A) - For Approval
Three of the sections are discussions, so this isn't over the limit. Anyway, this is my second charart in a row with the prefix "Tall" in its name... Constructments? -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  19:15, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Looks great. But he has a white chest. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:56, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Hawk. :) Just darken the shading on the black transition. -- SaintIce Happy Saint Patrick's Day 22:59, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Should he look like his warrior image or leader image? I like his leader image better because it looks like a tuxedo :)--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:17, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Night, I agree. I think that you should take the black off the chest and make it more patchlike. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:25, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish and extend the black to the arms a bit--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:32, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I noticed on his article that his leader image doesn't have a patch on his chest, but his warrior image does. This should be fixed on the next tweak week, but should we add a patch to his leader image, or take the patch off his warrior image? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Hawk! Though the patches on here look a bit black. Isn't Tallstar grey and white? See his leader image:

Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  09:20, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well, his leader image looks gray and white, but it's been comfirmed millions of times in the series that he's black and white, not gray and white. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 09:25, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thats weird. What are we going to go by? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  10:06, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I don't think his leader charart was meant to look gray and white, although now that I think about it, it really does. But that can easily be fixed during tweak week. Another issue is the black patch on his chest, which he has on his warrior image but not on his leader image. Personally, I think I'd make him without the patch. I don't picutre him with the black patch on his chest, but I also don't picture him like his leader image is. Similar to his leader image, but not excatly. But, let's wait till Bramble or Sandy can get on to offically decide what wer're goning to do Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 10:18, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the patch on his warrior version is ok because that patch kind of sticks out on that side. Haikage Ash's Talk 13:14, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think it definitely should be kept black and white. As well as Tallstar being black and white in the books, his warrior image is black and white. ☼ Misty ☼ Here comes the summer...  16:57, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The two different chararts confused me as well... So, I made a second version with his leader version's coloring (on the right). Which one should be kept? -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  17:03, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think the one on the right is better--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     19:28, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The one on the right. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:22, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, the one on the right Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 02:27, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for being such a mouse-brain. Image wise: Keep the first ones colouring on the second desgin thing. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  10:42, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

The left one is beautiful! But i have to go with the right.  Echo -Wave   Hi kitteh!  16:41, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, image on the right it is:) Constructments? -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  16:45, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Hawk. Just blur the highlight on his haunch. -- Ice Spring is here! 19:36, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There isn't a highlight on his haunch (it's white so a highlight would be hard to see there), so I blurred the shading on it instead. -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  20:45, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! I see nothing wrong--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     20:52, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   23:25, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Um yes I'm just an apprentice so ignore me if you like but his chest looks a little gray to me. He's black and white. Or is that just the shading?Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 15:55, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yes, it's shading:) Though, I knoticed it looked a little dark, so I lightened it a tad. -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  21:33, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, it looked fine on my laptop when I put cba on it...can you lighten the chest shading just a little bit more? -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   01:54, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - It's alright, Icy:) Actually, the image didn't reupload correctly and the shading stayed as it was before, for some reason. Hopefully, the changes will show now (PS, I never got the chance to reserve an FE character, so now I'm sadD: Oh, well). -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  19:08, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Can you thin the shading on the chest a little; it's just a tad too thick and none of the white can really be seen. ✐S aN  dY  16:55, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thinned chest shading. -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  19:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Gah, it won't reupload right again>.< I changed the file name (could someone delete the other one, please?). -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  19:17, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) - For Approval
I reposted Cloudspots! Comments? ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  16:29, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nice! Blur the front paw furthest away from us. Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  16:48, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred paw ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  17:00, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome, Misty! Just lighten and blur the highlight on his haunch. -- Ice Spring is here! 18:49, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

It says the ears are white, but the top of his head is white too. Shouldn't that part be black? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The Ear Pink looks a bit baby pink. It's a bit bright. Also blur all the white patches. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  10:39, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Responding to Night's comment, yeah, I wondered about that, but I just copied that from his med cat image. Shall I change it? And Responding to Fawn's comments, I got the earpink colour off his med cat image.Here's the image. ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  18:56, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I knew that but I just wasn't sure. Oh well, we'll keep that part white for consistency, then fix it on the next tweak week :) Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:27, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think when I did the med cat image I was told to add a white bit on his head as it looked strange without. I might be wrong but... ✐S aN  dY  20:26, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

His med. cat image is a bit greyer than this one. :P Fawnstorm  The Dark Forest are rising...  16:13, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I've blurred, lightened, etc, but I've kept the white part on the head. ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  19:47, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! :D All I can say is maybe bring the grey highlight all the way down the tail, only a bit lighter, like on the med cat, but that's only really a minor thing :P Love it! ^^ Brightfrost

'''Reuploaded. '''Tail highlighted! ;D ☼ Misty ☼  Here comes the summer...  16:35, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome :D But, just to be picky of me, the highlight is on the upperside of the med cat tail rather than the underside. Just me being picky ;P Brightfrost  of SunClan...  21:49, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make his white chest a bit thinner like his medicine cat image? Other than that it's great. insaneular   Talk  02:33, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid him. ☼ Misty ☼ Here comes the summer...  17:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? You've done a great job with him. ✐S aN  dY  19:01, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (A) - For Approval
i'm back! This is Frostfur as a apprentice. How is she? And I got BP today, and I also got Sunrise. (finally) -- Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 19:39, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the shading a bit around the chest and arms and darken the ear pink a bit--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     19:46, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Nighteh! Reuploaded. Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 21:18, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I have Frostfur (A) reserved and I checked and you don't...-- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 01:02, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Moonflight but this has been up since the 20th and you didn't reserve her until the 22nd. You have to check the PCA talk page first sometimes because some users change their reservations as soon as they put an image up. As for the image blur the shading and highlights together more. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:07, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my bad Ash. Sorry Blacktail. As for Frostfur, there seems to be a faint square of white on her chest. You might want to fix that :) -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 01:11, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (A) - For Approval
Hi everyone! This is Sootfur when he was an apprentice. CONSTRUCTIVE comments that will help me make it better will be fine! I hope it gets approved!Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 15:18, March 22, 2010 (UTC)



We give out constructive comments all the time. Blur the shading, make the ear pink a bit softer, it's a bit neon. And make the eyes more of an amber colour. Add some highlights. But this really good. Fawnstorm The Dark

Forest are rising... 16:00, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! This is my first one (besides Diesel, I was tired and dumb!!) Ok!Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 16:08, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sure you know this but put Reuploaded in bold every time you have edited it and re-done it.

'''Reuploaded Ok I made the ear pink softer and blurred the shading and changed the color of the eye to more amber. But about the highlights, I know to use the dodge tool but where do I put the highlights?Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 16:21, March 22, 2010 (UTC)''' see one of the tutorials for Info on how to highlight them. The ear pink is good but now looks a bit purple. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  19:57, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Save it as a png. It looks too pixelated right now--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:23, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

If you're not comfortable with highlights you don't have to do them. Besides that and what Nightshine said, blur the shading. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:19, March 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * nods slowly* ok well im fixing it now. sorry about the break i was at a friends house.Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 23:36, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay thanks ash shadow i like highlights but i don't know how to do them ;). Ok well I did download it as png. I'll try it again and blur the shading

'''Reuploaded Ok I fixed the ear pink and did the highlights but they suck :p! So, um there it is.Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 00:16, March 24, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded Ok I blurred that shading and downloaded on png. Is it any better?Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 16:59, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks pixely and the shading needs to be blurred more. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:09, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the shading but I don't know how to make it less pixely. Sorry about not knowing anything, this is my first charat!Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 01:33, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine, Snow :) Don't feel bad! To be honest thought, I'm not sure how you'd make it less pixly either... anybody? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 07:01, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Boulder (W) - For Approval
This would be like, my 4th or 3rd charart trying to be approved. Anyways, you can take down my other charart that's up. This is Boulder. I really want to do Raggedstar as deputy, can I do him as well as this one? Please... ♣Silver thistle  21:59, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Silverthistle! :D Just blur the shading, and brighten the highlight on his haunch. Once again, this is amazing! -- Ice Spring is here! 22:06, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be darkened a bit along with Ice said. To answer your question (or atleast what I think you meant) no. You can't put Raggedpelt up until this is approved. You can still make the image though. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:58, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


 * As long as it's not reserved, you can do Raggedstar's deputy image, but you can't put it up for approval until this image is approved. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   23:41, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

So if I don't want to do this image anymore, which I don't, I CAN put Raggedstars' deputy image up? ♣Silver thistle  02:58, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, but it won't take long to get this approved. And you still have Raggedstar as a deputy reserved for 2 weeks. When this limit runs out, you can just preserve him agin. I reckon you should keep up this one, it's really good. Don't give up *Places tail on Silverthistle's shoulder*. Image wise: Do what Ice and Ash said and blur the Ear Pink a but more. ;) Fawnstorm  The Dark Forest are rising...  12:11, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fine... *tears stream down whiskers* Fawnstorm, that is touching... ♣Silver thistle  22:44, March 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * whsikers twitch in amusment* I can be touching' when I want to. :) Add a few more stripes to his tail and blur them all. Fawnstorm  The Dark Forest are rising...  16:44, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) - For Approval
Since my Spottedkit turned out to be fail, I withdrawn her and put this up. Construments? -- Ice Spring is here! 23:08, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Good job Ice, this is much better than my attempt at him. Just make the white underbelly more visible and blur the ear pink. →  Batteh   ←  23:38, March 22, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded. -gasps- Blue, that's not true! Your art is wayyy better than mine. -- Ice Spring is here! 00:05, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit fuzzy/overblurred, they're quite a bit thinner and pointier on his warrior image... insaneular   Talk  00:18, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Just darken them some, and add some more Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:09, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Man, I got the song Replay stuck in my head. -sings it Ice Spring is here! 01:32, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more thinner stripes and add a few to his head. Darken the tail stripes--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     03:40, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is no way I can add more thinner stripes, seeing there is no room. Reuploaded. -- Ice Spring is here! 22:53, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Feathertail (Ki) - for approval


Im not proud of this image. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  21:08, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Forgot to mention that there are 4 discussions and 1 being declined. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  21:12, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

I have this image reserved! Someone keeps taking it off but I swear, I do. And no one before me had it, can I please do it? Feathertail is my faveorite charecter. Please?-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well if you had this image reserved before the user erased it, then I guess. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  22:03, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas, your two weeks were up, I think. So I think Moss has permission to do this image -- Ice Spring is here! 22:12, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well the two week limit was up but she has a character up for approval so it can't really count. I think the reason your reservations were removed was because of the lack of date. This is something you two will have to settle on your own. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:16, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Your projects have been removed because you don't date them Artimas. We didn't add the date column just for fun... it kinda needs to be filled. Sandwich has the full right to do this image as it was reserved incorrectly. This may seem unfair but... perhaps focus on getting Sandstorm (A) approved first Artimas.If you want to sort something out between you then it needs to go to the talk pages. ✐S aN  dY  22:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


 * Some comments on the image itself: the nose needs colour and the stripes need to be darkened. Also add some stripes on her belly and chest as there is a big gap. ✐S  aN  dY  17:00, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'll keep the image. Real sorry, Artimas. I'll promise i'll make this image really pretty. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  19:49, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks but i just want to say (not being obsessive here) but the reason there wasn't a date was because I had this reserved before the table was set up. By the time it was set up I had forgotten the date. So, whatever you peeps think. I'll be disappointed if I can't do it but I know you'll do a great job Sandwhich.

Anyway, she needs to be more silver, now she's kinda gray.-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:22, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

To get her the color she is on her warrior image, you can save her warrior image and use the dropper to get the color on this picture. I don't know if you knew that already.-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:40, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to make it more Silver, and add tabby markings moer, and I made the shading more of my style of kits. But I think I made it worse? ♣Gaelic Irish♣  22:48, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think the silver is good, she was described as a silver kit several times, but maybe make the tabby marks bigger and have less of them?-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:53, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (W) - For Approval


I temporarily withdrew Darkstripe until I could figure out how to make him less blurry. So, here's the newly named Bumblestripe. Yay, first Fading Echoes character for approval! :D Comments? →  Batteh   ←  23:00, March 23, 2010 (UTC)!

This is good. Lighten his pelt color a little. It looks dark compared to his apprentice image. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:05, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on his back look too thick compared to his apprentice image. This is really good, though! -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   23:27, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Batteh. He is pretty good... Except the stripes are thick, and then the pelt is 27 gray shades too dark!!! IT'S A CAT-ASTROPHE! (J.K. ;) ) Brightmoon   The Sign of the Moon!  23:29, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't I reserve him?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:45, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Jeez, Brightflight, chill. I can't really make the stripes "thinner"... I tried to make them thin when I made him. I'll lighten the pelt in a moment. →  Batteh   ←  23:57, March 23, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded - Made pelt lighter, attempted to sharpen stripes. →  Batteh   ←  00:07, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

Theres a darker gray spot around some of the stripes and personally I think his pelt should be just a tiny bit lighter. Nightshine:Blue had it first. I checked the history. Depending on what timezone you're in it might have been shown as the 22nd like it was on mine. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:12, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Any better? →  Batteh   ←  00:26, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

The color is good but his stripes kinda blobed out. sorry, I cant think of a better adjective. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:28, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to repeat what others have already said, but I think the stripes are the only real issue. On his apprentice pic, they're thick on his spine, but thin out to a point... so I'd recommend that you take the cray color of his pelt, and draw on the stripes to make them thin out, then just blur it really well. Other than that he looks good :)  insaneular    Talk  02:33, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I know mister picky here but the stripes on the tail don't look like the ones on his apprentice version~ <span style="color:brown;font-family:BatangChe;background:goldenrod;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:brown;">Moonpelt ~It’s track season~ 03:31, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Woahh, hang on. The charart is nice but Nightshine had him reserved first! :3 In fact, I had him reserved first, after I woke up at midnight, but then decided it wasn't fair to have two Fading Echoes chararts after some messages on the discussion. I was waiting for someone to actually ask nicely if they could do him, so I could remove his name from my 'list.' =/ Brightfrost  of SunClan...  07:41, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

There needs to be a lot more stripes. His apprentice image has stripes that are thin and lots in numbers but the ones here are thicker and there are only a few. ;) Fawnstorm  The Dark Forest are rising...  10:14, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well.. Yeah... but still. The stripes need to be thin, and large in number. Brightmoon  The Sign of the Moon!  20:00, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I completely redid him. I know the haunch stripes look kind of weird, but I don't really know what to do about them... suggestions? →  Batteh   ←  23:15, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

We still need to discuss who is going to do this charart!--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:19, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Work it out between the two of you if you're so concerned, Nightshine. Just try and keep it civil... I'm getting sick of all these comments 'didn't I reserve this first?' and 'so-and-so had this reserved!' Almost isn't worth having the current projects table. -.- ...sometimes I wish the whole thing would just disappear. Anyways, just try and work it out between the two of you, please. -- Bramble 03:02, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I thought we'd worked it out, but I guess not. Comments on the image? →  Batteh   ←  11:18, March 25, 2010 (UTC)!

The midriff stripe is really big. Can you sort it out? Didn't Nightshine ask Frosty if she could do it (sorry Barmble XD)? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:41, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Concerning Brairlight SPOILERS
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I haven't finished but... as far as I know, Brairlight can't move her back legs, hence she can't be in the sitting warrior blank. I was thinking perhaps modifying the queen blank thinner + legs sticking out? Dark hallows 05:37, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

lol, no one is going look at this :D That seems good, but should it wait till we have one of those thingys where we can sort out chararts?(sorry, I've forgot the name xD) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 06:59, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Um...I am doing Brairlight (W) and I would just like to know what happens to her. Can you e-mail me ([mailto:fawnstorm@hotmail.co.uk fawnstorm@hotmail.co.uk]) what happens to her? I just don't what any one who hasn't read Fading Echoes to read it. :) I haven't read it but if I'm going to do her... Fawnstorm  The Dark Forest are rising...  10:06, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I think it would be fine to have her in the warrior blank. Despite her back leg injury, she could probably balance on her front legs to stay in that position, and I'm not sure if modifying another blank would be worth it. But if we did have to use another blank, I'd say elder instead of Queen because we don't want her to look pregnant :P  insaneular    Talk  10:51, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! Cool! So I just do Brairlight as a warrior like normal? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  12:07, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, I'll email you... I don't want to sound to controlling, I thought I'd bring it up. Dark hallows 16:51, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really like the idea of her having an edited queen image. But, I think on the warrior image the hind legs should at least look a little splayed out, at least the one closest to us. That book was so good though! I bought it today, and finished it at night XD Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:55, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (E) up for approvals!
OMG this is appsalutly terrible anyways this was originly longtail but i with drew him and put this up this was a very fast char art! and does any one know how to shade? plz tell me!LionClaw132 01:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I know he was elder age but was he ever seen as an elder? For shading if you use pixlr use the burn tool. It looks like a hand. Also the lineart is too thick. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:14, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, Ash is right. Try using a tutorial to help--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:17, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks as if you saved it over the elder blank. Please create a new file for this--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:19, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

ok i did what you said and here it is!(btw dont say anything about the eyes i personaly love them!LionClaw132 01:45, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of the thumbnail and frame. You don't need a new section every time.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:54, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

ok thnx but any thing else about i or is it fit enough to go on Cinderfur's page as a pixle?LionClaw132 01:56, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Not yet. Some of the lineart is weird. You need to add shading and fix the eye--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:03, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

When I tried making this small again it turned into the elder lineart. Don't use that file to color save it and rename the file as your own--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:04, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

There is no color~ NOWHERE Cinderfur is gray~ <span style="color:brown;font-family:BatangChe;background:goldenrod;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:brown;">Moonpelt ~It’s track season~ 02:29, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

shes right~NOWHERE!LionClaw132 02:36, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Did you look at the tutorials? I took it out of thumbnail and frame again--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     03:00, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

He was never seen as an elder so this will have to be declined. Sorry--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     03:04, March 25, 2010

yes he was look at hes page and it says he was a elder!(into the wild!)

Okay. You can keep this then. You need to re-do his image so the lineart is the right size.

Here: Start over with that--  N i g h t s h i n e      Ü     03:13, March 25, 2010 (UTC

ok fineLionClaw132 03:20, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

ok there you go!LionClaw132 15:22, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

The background is black, it needs to be transparent. There are some white pixels on his paws, his eyes need to be colored in, he needs ear pink, and there's no shading Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:46, March 25, 2010 (UTC)