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Hawkwing's Journey/Chapter 4 ~ Silver Nomination
Updated most of it, I'll come back to the others later.
 * Birdwing's kit need to be listed under the minor characters with the tad (Unnamed)
 * Can you split paragraphs 3, 5, and 6 in two parts? They're extremely long, and long blocks of text aren't the easiest to read.
 * Throughout the summary, most every cat's name is redundant. Try to go through and make sure a cat's name isn't used in several consecutive sentences, or at least the same sentence twice by using descriptions and pronouns to substitute.

Try and go through one more time for redundancy, and also, the 'Unnamed kits' in the characters list should be at least specified to be 'Birdwing's kits', or as we usually list them each individually with the (Unnamed) tag since we know who they are.

Still working?

Updated! Yes! I forgot all about this seeing that I was working on PCA. Sorry for the wait. ^^

CBV?

Canon
Hey so I found this page floating around with no project on it, and it seemed more PB oriented than anything so I thought to pop it in here. Ik it's with the category of Role Play Phenomenon, and everything else from there has been deleted, but... couldn't it be revamped? I wanted to pose the question here of whether it should be deleted like the rest of the category, or made a part of PB and revamped/ add new stuff and such. Thoughts?

Yea, I agree with that. It is information for the reader and it should be in PB. 14:55, 4/22/2017 14:55, April 22, 2017 (UTC)ggC1ND3R_STR1P3

Me too. It does contain many PB-related articles. --  17:35, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Ravenpaw's Farewell/Chapter 3 - Silver Nomination
I didn't work on this at all, it was just a finished article with no nomination. So, credit to the editors. 04:32, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

Hey I'm asking, did you ask the writer to nominate this? I usually don't stick my nose in such matters, but this was written only a week ago by one of the people who tend to nominate what they write. So like, imo they should be asked whether they want the credit for this, because they did write it. Or at least, I know I'd want the credit.

Woops, didn't notice the date. 21:37, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

Sure, I'd like to take credit. It's my fault since I didn't nominate it after I had written it. Thanks for the heads up! Starling  spots  13:58, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

Great, glad I brought it up to check. CBV? - since the original post was on the 25th-

A Dangerous Path/Chapter 11 - Silver Nomination
Credit to the editor who wrote the summary. I just added characters, links, and fixed some grammar. 04:58, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

The majority of the summary is all in past-tense - can you go in and fix that? I'd specify, but there's some everywhere, and I'd recommend just reading through and checking each verb.

Done. I also thought the word 'he' was overused in one of the paragraphs, and added in some other things to replace it. I also fixed more grammar that, in my mind, didn't really make sense. 20:33, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

The Fourth Apprentice/Chapter 4 ~ Silver Nomination
Lol the last part of the chapter reminds me of a dramatic part in a movie. Thanks Spooky for the formatting, I had no idea what I was doing when I first created the page. :P 03:40, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

Idk but, from how the summary's worded - is Leopardstar mentioned by name? If she is, can you clarify the summary to reflect that? And if she isn't, can you add the (Unnamed) tag next to her name in the character list?

Fixed Well, it's kinda weird. She's mentions by name through the whole chapter, until Dovepaw mentions a sick cat. 23:10, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

The Ultimate Guide/RiverClan - Silver Nomination
23:39, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

Join Request
May I? --PyroNacht (talk) 20:57, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

Welcome! Make sure to look over the guidelines, and I've added you in.

Tallstar's Revenge/Chapter 3 ~ Silver Nomination
It feels nice to be contributing again. Anyway.. I'm not sure if I added too much or messed anything up so, comments? o3o --PyroNacht (talk) 22:46, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like you're using the characters' names one too many times. Care to go through and turn some of those names into pronouns or descriptions?

I had a feeling that would come up. xD I'll do that- but could you offer me some examples on how else to refer to the cats? Do I use pieces of their description or? I'm not quite sure how to change them and I think "tom" or "kit" would get just as old. :P --PyroNacht (talk) 16:53, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Well, you could use a shortened version of the cat's description. Use a bit of everything. For instance, in this sentence (i made it up): Twigpaw turned to face Violetpaw, "Violetpaw" could be replaced with "she-cat", "her sister", or "the black-and-white she-cat." It depends on how you referred to the cat previously. Sorry if I didn't cover everything.

Tallstar's Revenge/Chapter 4 ~ Silver Nomination
I couldn't find a better quote so.. --PyroNacht (talk) 00:17, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Midnight (Book)/Chapter 4 ~ Silver Nomination
First few paragraphs aren't by me. I took over since it hasn't been edited in a long time. --  15:42, April 29, 2017 (UTC)