Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 80

Bouncefire (A) - Approved
Well, I tried... Comments? - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  15:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste near his chin/chest and his hind leg closest to us. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  20:08, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the whole image a tad brighter? Other than that, I can't find anything wrong with this. 02:41, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading? It just does not seem right, but I have bad eyes so it may just be me. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think the haunch highlight/light part needs to be a tiny bit lighter. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 07:00, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlights" bigger. I don't think the shading needs to be darkened at all. 09:57 Wed Dec 21

Re-uploaded. 17:29, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste on the back, near the tail. :3 21:24, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:11, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reverse the depth on the eyes. Isn't that what it's called? Purplemoon Four candles 4 days!!  15:04, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

I have always used the same method of depth in the eyes of the apprentice chararts up til' now. I'm not changing it. 15:44 Thu Dec 22 15:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and darken it. 00:53, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:07 Fri Dec 23 01:07, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

There's a litttllleee tiiiiny bit of waste above his shoulder :3 03:03, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:29 Fri Dec 23 03:29, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate him a little, he looks too grey. 12:05, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:10 Fri Dec 23 15:10, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The color seems a bit off. Too bright I believe. 19:22, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Took all the colors directly from his warrior charart. 22:21 Fri Dec 23 22:21, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten/make the highlights bigger. 02:22, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Day without comment. CBA? Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:21, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Approved  16:22, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (A) ~ Approved
Here she is, comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  23:34, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. F i r e s t a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  23:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:48, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  23:55, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 00:13, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  00:24, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it a bit more. <span style="">00:38 Sun Dec 18

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  00:53, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Now blur it a little bit? And maybe lighten the shoulder and thigh. Breeze whisker  02:00, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  15:43, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Please smudge both sides of the earpink into the ear  01:55, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on th eback leg closest to us. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  23:49, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad on the farthest back leg from us. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:49, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  18:23, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a lighter part on the hind leg closest to us. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  22:39, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch that, it's for the light source. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  22:45, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  21:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  21:16, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

The base pelt color need to be lightened to match her elder. Once you've done that I'll CBA this  22:33, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? PRESENT TIME! Give me them!  22:43, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 22:45, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved  16:28, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Harespring (A) ~ Approved
Okay, I copied his warrior image best I can.. I only blurred the patches a bit so it would really match the other images. 13:55, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:46, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink so its not so purplish. 00:27, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas &amp; Hannukah to all!  00:35, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

It may just be me, but can you darken and/or define the shading esp. on the tummy. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:48, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes. <span style="">15:30 PM, Wed Dec 21, 2011

Reuploaded Did all of the above. (too lazy to list them all) ;P Except for Misty's.. I took the earpink off of the warrior image. 21:32, December 21, 2011 (UTC) Smudge the patches more and blur and darken the shading a bit. 03:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened the shading, and I only blurred the patches a bit since I want it to match the warrior image. 16:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the brown patches exept for the one on the tail. <span style="">23:56, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Reuploaded Blurred them just a tad. 03:21, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Over 12 hours, this looks wonderful ^^ CBA? 19:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt but I can barely see the shading  19:48, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded So close... >.< Darkened the shading. 00:34, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry D: I'm gonna restart the CBA for you  02:18, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Approved  16:31, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pinenose (A) - Approved
Eh... well comments? 15:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Pinenose is a girl...and shorthaired. o3o 15:34, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *headdesk* 15:53, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Her ear farest from us, is pale gray, almost dark gray, make it black. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it was....forget that. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:09, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the belly shading, since the paws have dark shading, and the shading would make more sense if you did darken it. 18:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Green eyes, Atelda o3o 22:25, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Woops. 22:13, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. Ot'z all around the image. 23:01, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:47, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think this looks great, CBA? 19:00, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Approved  16:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)