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Curlypaw (KP) - CBA
I am a lot happier with this one! I like her eyes. 02:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reup 02:57, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading again please. 03:03, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:12, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the body (sorry that I'm not giving you a break). 03:37, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the <-- side 03:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be darkened - but it's probably the tint. Is the layer on Multiply? Try that if it's not, or change the brightness setting/saturation/contrast setting =)

Reuploaded 04:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste from the above <-- hip all the way to the underside of the tail. 04:42, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:36, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the eye-depth

​Reuploaded 21:50, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of shading to the collar? 00:14, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the bottom of the tail, and possibly darken the shading? 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:24, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading more. 15:12, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:59, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

darken the shading. not define, but darken. somewhere there should be a menu for "Hue" or "Brightness," for example, in firealpaca it's under filter. i believe that's what you use? anyway, darken it. 00:45, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:10, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's actually quite a bit of very light waste all around the image. 03:12, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:07, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the collar shading?

Reuploaded 22:48, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but shading appears to be leaking away from the lienart along the back, tail, and left cheek. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:06, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:21, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the eye depth a bit. 21:04 Wed Jan 11

Reuploaded 21:55, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

There's like a bump in the lineart at the front of the front leg. I think it's waste.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:34, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I erased all along there and there isn't a bump? did you mean the part of the collar?? There isn't anything. 00:40, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if I got it, but I think. Darn, my five day streak is gone. That's alright. -- 03:28, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the back and shoulder a little bit, as well as the collar

Reuploaded 05:07, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Comments? 04:55, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I can hardly see it. 19:49 Sun Jan 29 19:49 Sun Jan 29

Really? I can see it perfectly fine...can I get a second opinion? :) 20:00, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

I think the darkness is probably fine, but the shading needs more depth, and the light should be defined on the back

Reuploaded I darkened it anyways 20:45, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Darktail (Kit) - CBA
did the shading at midnight so it's messy 15:31, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Fixed the align. Remember no aligning! Also, he looks gray, lessen the texture a bit? 15:42, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten and smooth out the shading a bit. 17:28, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded insert creative message 21:14, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define/add the black markings that should be around his eyes? Also maybe smooth the shading on the legs

reuploaded i really shouldnt try smudged shading

Smoothen out leg shading -- 03:11, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. He's looking more gray than white for the most part. Also, lighten the tail a bit; I can't make out the lineart at all, and my moniter makes things appear lighter. 03:32, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

I can't lighten the tail, that's how it is on his other images. 03:34, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:35, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading more? The white really looks gray

reuploaded  03:28, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Where are the black spots on his eyes? 02:27, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

darnit, deleted the layer accidentally and saved and closed it by the time i noticed. those markings can actually be hard 00:18, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail i can bearly see it 23:40, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:32, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

this kinda died shall i send in a necromancer (aka comments?) 04:24, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Ryestalk (Star) - CBA
Haven't done this in a while so I keep thinking I've done something wrong. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:14, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

This needs a reservation and date on the chart^^ :)

Smoothen out the flank shading a bit. c: 04:24, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thanks for telling me I knew there was something I missed c: - I smoothed the flank a little, but not too much as I like the style I created with it. Also reduced the highlight on her back. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:52, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Added more stripes to the tail to match apprentice and queen. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  18:46, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thicken the dorsal stripe a tad? It looks thinner than the other images

Thicken all of the stripes and smooth them out. The first in this set is the warrior, not the apprentice, kit, or queen. Also, the facial stripes need to come down past the eyes, and why they don't on the queen and kit is beyond me. (tldr; I designed this pattern, so I kinda know what I'm talking about)

Re-uploaded — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  11:44, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Comments? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:01, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I thought I CBA'd this days ago???? Wikia must not have been publishing edits at the time. CBA?

Oliver (KP) ~ For Approval
Eww

Smoothen out the shading by the < eye :) 05:09, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out all the shading, imo.

Define the ear pink just a tiny bit 01:59, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there shouldn't be quite so much shading on the left cheek, with the direction the light's coming from. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:58, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm late lmao xP Is it better?

Bluebellkit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Sorry if this looks bad, or I am doing something wrong. ;-; Fallenice the Great (talk) 23:59, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Maybe define the shading on the tail, legs, and back paw. 00:02, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Thanks Ivy! Fallenice the Great (talk) 00:08, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 00:32, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Also, I changed the name to Bluebellkit.kit instead of Bluebell.kit X) Fallenice the Great (talk) 02:34, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the front legs please? 20:05, January 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading tint should still be darkened^^

''Updated. ''Fallenice the Great (talk) 15:08, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the shading a bit on the right foreleg and back paw. 00:41, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little on the chest, to show it's roundness, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 03:12, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Fallenice the Great (talk) 13:41, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad. 19:36 Sun Jan 29

Shading is leaking away right above the foot that is the most towards right.--Shadowbright67 (talk) 16:12, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Stone (HJ) (K) - CBA


He looks a bit yellowish, at least on my screen. 21:38, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Blur/smudge the earpink more and define shading in the > ear :) 22:28, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The earpink still seems hard-edged :/ Mind blurring/smudging it more? 01:48, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's as smooth as I can get it; doesn't look sharp at all to me so idk?

CBA? I like this holy crap. I'd say one of your best images, imo.

Cedarheart (K) - CBA
04:12, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 21:38, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:19, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Wetfoot (Star) - CBA
16:11, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Whorlpaw (K) ~ For Approval
wow this was hard to shade. i'm not sure how to feel about this. ~Patch   feather~   19:12, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

I like it! My favorite part is the white "stripe." Breezy1235 (talk) 02:07, January 28, 2017 (UTC)Breezy1235

Breeze, please do not just comment for the sake of a complement. Please give advice if needed. Also, maybe read the rules if you would like to join, so you know. 02:13, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Looking good! Define the shading on the right front leg please? 01:44, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Tinycloud (Q) - For Approval
00:22, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit 00:43, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but there's already quite a bit of depth and I was using the same eye color as her other images. 02:26, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Very pretty! Blur the shading at the top of the haunch a touch more and maybe smudge the ear pink? 18:27, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:51, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Sandynose (W) ~ For Approval
03:03, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Can you make the eyebrows more apparent and a little higher above the eye? 03:09, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:59, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Oakfur (R) ~ For Approval
guess who's back from hiatus hell 14:59 Sun Jan 29

Define the shading/light source. 19:41 Sun Jan 29

re-ups 20:58 Sun Jan 29

Dawnpelt (Ro) - For Approval
And I actually started liking her in TaS too :| 18:44 Sun Jan 29

Could you smooth out the markings a bit? I don't think they're this sharp on the other images, though I could be wrong. 22:38, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I smoothed the edges a little bit but I'm not really able to do much more with them without straight up blurring them and they are more defined than that on other images. 01:24 Mon Jan 30

I think they're blurred, but not that blurred? I'm not entirely sure... I'd suggest asking Stealthfire, since I think she made the main pattern?

I'm just not sure 'cause the only one with really blurred stripes is the queen. And it was so long ago that they were tweaked that I don't remember which was done first lol. 15:18 Mon Jan 30

Waterkit (Ki) - For Approval
07:08, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Foggy (Ro) (Ro) - For Approval
Howdy there.

Either I'm blind, or that's my screen, but define the shading on the back leg?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 13:26, January 30, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Which back leg? He's got two.

The one most visible to us...❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 13:38, January 30, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Re-uploaded.

So much better than mine. X) Smudge the Earpink a bit more? .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 20:43, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Rileypool (W) - For Approval
Ehhhhh...I may mess around with the stripe placement later. :/ 17:25, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

On the other images, the black doesn't curve around the ear, but is only on the tip part, and the earpink is a tiny bit brighter. :) 17:47, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ^^ 17:52, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

I think the tail stripes should be a bit more jagged on the edges, like the other images

Reups 20:30, January 30, 2017 (UTC)

Rippletail (SC) (RO) ~ For Evaluation
First rogue...comments?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:02, January 31, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Lighten the shading a lot. Also, rememeber to have a heading, and don't align your images! .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:07, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart

Smooth out the shading. Also there's leaking shading throughout the image. 00:12, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

There isn't any color in the nose hole. Also, should the file be named "Rippletail (SC).rogue.png" ? 00:17, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste spots around the image; near the back of the paws and a spot above the back. 00:24, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Changed the heading to evaluation, again. I think this is still your first image... 00:39, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Curlypaw (A) ~ For Approval
First appie! ^^ Curlypaw. . .so. . .enthusiastic. :/ .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:04, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

The eye on the other image, mine, are much darker. 00:16, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups   .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:25, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Where is your light source? Can you please define it? It's hard to tell where your light source is with the shading on the legs. And I think there should be at least some light on the neck and back. 00:31, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  .:.Mapleslash.:. (talk) 00:45, January 31, 2017 (UTC)