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Diesel (Lo) ~ CBA
Geez this was hard. Also will upload later to tweak shading.

On the kp (i know it's not approved yet, but it was the first one uploaded) the stripes on the body and tail are pointed the other direction.

i think the stomach shading is leaking near the front leg 05:06, 9/20/2017

If the kittypet was uploaded first, shouldn't this be short furred as well? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 05:35, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Star had no way of knowing that Broken would have her image be short furred. Give her a bit of time to fix things up to match, it hasn't been long since she uploaded. I'm not trying to be mean in any way, just trying to explain why it's going down like this.

Broken's is posted first, therefore she holds the master pattern claim here. All Star would really need to do is change the pelt length anyways. Everything else looks pretty good to me, in terms of matching. He is in fact shown with the shorter fur (compared to Graystripe, who has long fur), hence why I added it to his description.

the haunch stripes don't really match. i know its a different angle, but i think its missing a stripe or two. see here http://vvcap.com/oRLXOjslnEm 03:12, 9/21/2017

I think the top stripe on the --> front leg should be a bit smaller. And sharpen both stripes on the front leg. 13:11, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Sorry for the wait! I got swamped in schoolwork and stuff.

the thicker stripe on the ---> front leg needs to stretch up the arm further. 06:15, 9/22/2017

re-up

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us? 00:58, September 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail please. --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:11, September 27, 2017 (UTC)

re-up eh.

Maybe recede the shading on all of the paws just a touch, so we can see the real color underneath? The whole paw seems shaded on all of them, making them all look kinda gray. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:20, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Can you define the shading on the tail,closer to where it meets the bum? :) 02:12, October 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

CBA?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  07:32, October 12, 2017 (UTC)

Flamenose (Star) - For Approval
I really wish I could get this tablet to work on photoshop. 16:02 Sun Oct 1

Define/darken the shading a bit? I'm having a rough time seeing any of it, really.

Reuploaded This was hell to shade in general. And I can't smudge or blur anything on SAI2 so this was hand drawn and why its rough. 16:07 Sun Oct 1

The roughness is fine, honestly. It's no rougher than David's image. I just genuinely couldn't see the shading. I can see it now, though. =P

the stripes on the body are meant to be more classic style stripes, might be my fault bexcause of the shading and whatever on the warrior though 16:18, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading again? --ErmineGlow (talk) 16:29, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Its on 100% opacity already, but I'll try. 16:31 Sun Oct 1

The shading is also leaking away from the lineart slightly behind the shoulder < way and at the base of the chest and < arm a little.

Define the shading on the right shoulder/leg. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 19:43, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading altogether with a different layer setting that I am still getting used to. 23:50 Sun Oct 1

You did a beautiful job with the shading, Sun! Smooth it out a smidge? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 23:58, October 1, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks, Cosmo! I will see what I can do in terms of smoothing it. This program is awful in that respect compared to photoshop lol. 00:03 Mon Oct 2

I could not get it any smoother. /: <span style="">14:11 Tue Oct 3

If you can't make it smoother, then could you perhaps add a bit more depth on the flank? It ends pretty sharp and stays the same shade all the way through, so looks a tiny bit flat.

Could you also add some shading depth on the face? this is awesome Sun :^o

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:19, October 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">01:10 Mon Oct 9

Could you define the shading depth on the tail just a tad? Wow, this is amazing! What's your secret? :0 02:30, October 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you~ <span style="">00:49 Wed Oct 11

Define earpink, little hard to see.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  07:34, October 12, 2017 (UTC)

Pad (ki) ~ For Approval
<span style="">15:46, 10/12/2017

Colors need to match huskers loner. The pale parts look off in color

re-uploaded. <span style="">18:06, 10/12/2017

Quailkit (Ki) - Declined
This is my first drawing for PCA. I'll cut out the outline when I'm done (and have more time).

TheArtistThatDoesArtSometimes (talk) 08:11, October 13, 2017 (UTC)

Quailkit's color hasn't been revealed, so therefor he doesn't get an image, sorry!

As per Danny. Declining.