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Mudfur (Alt W) ~ Declined


Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. -- 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad? ​

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry 01:34, 8/30/2019

Still working? 14:39, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They lost their drawing pen. I believe it is Vec who gave them an extension Moo (talk) 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, sorry for the long wait, like Moo said I lost my pen and Vec (may have been Jayce I can't remember) gave me an extension. I didn't want to put it off any longer so I did it with a keyboard. Anyway, I did all the suggestions (or most) that you guys said, what do you think?

Looking good Firespring! Hmm, curve the shading on the haunch more (let me know if you need a redline) and there's waste outside the tail. The coloring on the nosepink and mottles are still a little off (nose should be #1b1411, the mottles should be #493522). -- 23:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now?

You're getting there! I think the shading could be smoothed a bit, and the mottles look sharper on the alt star (try running a low opacity sharpen tool or a low sharpen filter on the mottles, beware of color pixels). You could also use a low opacity pencil and draw over the mottles, which will make them sharper as well. -- 00:12, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the <-- ear. 00:23, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about now? Also, there already is shading on the ear. 00:28, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Is it me, or am I seeing texture on the image? If it's texture, it needs to be removed as the alt star doesn't have any. -- 00:31, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Removed texture. 00:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading on --> that ear but not on <-- this ear. 01:04, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added shading to left ear. 05:34, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading a some more on the body

Reuploaded. 21:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to the back leg and smooth it out on the shoulder and haunch more. -- 21:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:30, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading on the < ear; helps with flatness

Still working?

My comment on there not being any lighter mottles in the tail tip still stands. 17:53, 9/14/2019

Reuploaded. Yes, still working. Sorry for the wait. How's this? 05:51, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

you need to remove all lighter mottles in the tail tip. There shouldn't be any light in the dark at all 13:30, 9/15/2019

Add shading to <--- that ear and to where the haunch meets tail. 19:24, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:14, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading overall, add/expand it on the tail and add some to the back half of the tail. Add some more shading along the ---> part of the shoulder; at least some part of it would be in shadow. 01:43, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

^^^ especially the haunch, chest, and shoulder Moo (talk) 05:29, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

still need to remove the lighter mottles on the tail tip... 02:38, 9/22/2019

adding on. the front paws are not one solid color. the mottles need to be more strung out and span sizes, not just one size. 02:40, 9/22/2019

Still working? 14:23, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. -- 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^

reuploaded 16:48, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a tiny bit on the tail, plus I think it could be smoothed some. -- 23:07, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the chest? It looks rather flat there 17:40, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 15:17, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

I feel as if this doesn't quite match the pattern placement of the queen's tail, which is what it should most reflect since both are on the same definite side; vs, the star is angled and thus not the best to match this blank to

reuploaded -- 17:54, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading any more on the tail? 20:59, 9/14/2019

Still working? 19:41, September 18, 2019 (UTC)

Yes. reuploaded -- 19:13, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ginger patches on the bottom forelegs should be lowered a bit. And the orange patch on the shoulder could be rounded/smoothed a bit more. 14:26, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little shading to the >> ear just to help it not look flat. Also, still working?

Smokehaze (Ki) - For Approval
05:33, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading out

There's waste near the ear furthest from us. Also, could you remove the shading above the nose, and add some to the chest? 16:36, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened. But I'm confused where us the light source? Moo (talk) 22:56, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is something similar to this. With this source there would be a tiny bit of light on < this back leg, near the toe line. -- 02:06, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ah right. Lighten the shading? Moo (talk) 05:11, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, Vec, could you give me an extension with this and Sasha? My tablet’s lost. -- 04:35, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

We can give you an extension until the 18th, but if you do not find it before then, we would have to decline this. 18:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:28, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you lighten the shading a little perhaps? Maybe expand it onto the shoulder, then smooth it by the base of the tail, face, and haunch. 14:12, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

shading could be smoothed all out in general 21:00, 9/14/2019

'''reuploaded. 21:33, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

define the shading more on the tail, remove a bit of the shading on the haunch, and expand the shading behind the front leg closest to us (including the shoulder) 13:32, 9/15/2019

'''reuploaded. 15:16, September 16, 2019 (UTC)'''

Remove some of the shading on the tail. The shading should not cover the whole thing but rather half of it length wise. 16:38, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 05:43, September 17, 2019 (UTC)'''

Also remove some of the shading on the back leg closest to us- with the source there would be a tiny bit of light shining on it, at least remove it to the little line near the haunch. -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 08:58, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

Wrong back leg Ripple- I mean the one closest to us. -- 12:06, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

areas circled in red are some handy dandy places to add some shading

The shading on the ear still looks very flat; try adding some more depth there? 14:27, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:29, September 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

here is a redline; in red is waste, and in blue is where you should remove shading ^^  18:43, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

Leaf (SqH) (Ki) - For Approval
00:44, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

another Himalayan, I see Lighten the shading, smooth it out as well, and blur/smudge the pale parts. -- 00:46, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

^ adding to potato's comment; smudging them would probably work better to work with the flow of fur on the blank

sorry potato. '''reuploaded. 15:22, September 19, 2019 (UTC)'''

I haven't seen Himalayans with lighter parts before... if you're going to make the image match their parent's, wouldn't it make sense for the darker parts to be the points, and the lighter parts the base? ​​​​

Oh. Alright. I made the parts lighter because I didn't want it to seem as if I copied Potato's design. 15:35, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Just like to let you know you can do something similar to my design for Squirrel, just maybe do a darker gray and make the hue different than what I have. =D -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smudge the pale parts and lighten them some, since I can't see the shading at all in those places. -- 00:29, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Damn. Has this been approved? I wanted to put up a Leaf image. I spent ages... -Wavetail (talk) 07:55, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

it hasn't been approved yet, but this is only for critiques of the image. that said, can you lighten up the points some, they look black right now. 07:57, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Am I allowed to do that? How...? Also, I put up my own. Should I remove it? Wavetail (talk) 08:10, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

When I tried to smudge, the darker parts got white... the smudge tool hates me. Sorry for being such an unstable person. '''reuploaded. 09:05, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading and expand it on the face. -- 12:09, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:50, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

Remove some shading on the foreleg (should only encompass half of the limb like the tail) and same thing with the ear closest to us. 19:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:37, September 22, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add some more depth to the ear shading? 14:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

likewise red is waste, and blue is where you should remove shading. 18:45, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:06, September 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

Jayclaw (K) - For Approval
Comments? Moo (talk) 07:03, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit. -- 12:53, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

I also think the earpink should be duller to match. 18:32, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the haunch. -- W i n d s o n g   (talk)   20:14, September 21, 2019 (UTC) Bold textreuploaded --Moo (talk) 02:21, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

texture could still be defined, on my screen it looks nearly absent 03:44, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if it’s just my current screen, but his eyes should be more of grey-blue, they’re looking a little purple at the moment

Reuploaded --Moo (talk) 07:26, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

The texture could still be darker, and the earpink and eyes are still a bit too neon I believe. 14:32, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

To me the earpink and eyes look very similar to the warrior? But texture can be fixed --Moo (talk) 23:12, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Moo (talk) 03:39, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

The eye color on the warrior looks more like a bluish gray than the blue on here. I think the base on the warrior also appears to be a few shades lighter. 14:29, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Who owns the file? Do you know? I think some hex codes would be fab --Moo (talk) 00:28, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the facial shading to curve the shape of the face; reaches too far outwards. Also, Tybaxel should have the warrior's file still

Boulder (Ki) - CBA
21:48, 9/20/2019

Maybe expand the shading on the haunch? 19:50, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly change the tint? It clashes with the rest of the images in his set and throws off the coloring.

reups The haunch shading is intentional, as there would be more light shining there 15:42, 9/22/2019

could i ask what your source is for that shading? I just agree with Vec, I think it might make more sense to have a little more there considering how much shade the shoulder and stomach are in

okiedokie np, will reup soon. also my source is over the top but farther to the right (our right, of their head) of the image  20:39, 9/23/2019

reups 00:26, 9/26/2019

CBA?

Shyheart (K) - CBA
Matched her to the family tree icon, like all the other family tree kits as of late. -- 16:52, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think they was described with a white paw? 16:54, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded tfw you stare at the old kit for too long forgetting it was a Su cite for white paws -- 16:57, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

up to you in the end, but could you maybe tint the shading a warm colour? the shade you've got at the moment is kind of washing out her colour a little

Reuploaded The color issues with Photoshop apparently have returned- tried colorpicking from the icon again and this time I think I got the right color. -- 23:31, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

try the hex code #CDAC87 - thats what I get from colourpicking the icon? its a bit lighter than the new colour you've got :D

Reuploaded Warmed the tint as well. -- 23:41, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Would there be any shading closer to the haunch/base of the tail, since the light (correct me if I'm wrong) is going <--- way? Feels like it should be flipped to the other side. 14:36, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think there would be, but I did tweak some things with the tail. -- 22:29, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

If the shading is coming from our right, there wouldn't be as much shading on the cheek, but, it would instead be more on just the neck and the area just above the tail, where its covering the shoulder? (i can redline if that makes no sense) For the tail, maybe even thin it out a little to help it match the source too?

Reuploaded -- 22:50, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

sorry but im not seeing a difference between the uploads?

There is a difference similar to that of Skywatcher- check the file history and look very closely. -- 23:34, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing any dufference either. 00:01, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Take 3. How about now? -- 00:07, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 03:32, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Snaketail (PoT) (W) ~ for approval


01:10, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

I believe this needs to match the elder. 01:29, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

No, I think the OG warrior was before the elder image. 03:06, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

The elder was made before the rule was created to match remade images to the old set, even if the entire set was being redone. I'm of course biased here as I made the elder, but I think that unless we have all of the images that were redesigned redone to match their old designs, this should match the elder 03:13, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

Precedent per that mess of a discussion ended in anything prior to the dont redo the pattern gets to stay as it was. Thus, it'll need to match the elder

Flower Foot (K alt) - CBA
I tried but kinda failed on this. 01:24, September 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sandgorse (W) - CBA
definitely gonna fiddle with stripes so feedback for them is v much appreciated

reuploaded can't tell if i fixed them or not lol

CBA?

Swift Minnow (W) ~ CBA
made this in like 4 mins because being busy is such a real thing, can go fix whatever inevitably is bad later. settings/colors from hunter

reuploaded fixing

CBA? 03:29, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Amberclaw (Ki) - CBA
Things without my shading style look strange to me lol <span style="">00:54, 9/26/2019

CBA?

Spotfur (K) - For Approval
I like this gal 19:44, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading to the tail? 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Hoot (K) ~ CBA
settings from my hoot and jumper images

CBA? 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Stormcloud (Ki) - For Approval
First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png ​​​

The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. -- 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. -- 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

My art program doesn’t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe

01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe it’s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading <span style="">00:42, 9/28/2019

Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesn’t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading over all? 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me if it’s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch. <span style="font-weight:bold;font-style:italic;font-family:&quot;Comic Sans MS&quot;;font-size:15px;"> W i n d s o n g  <span style="font-weight:bold;font-family:&quot;Comic Sans MS&quot;;font-size:10px;"> (talk)   09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) ~ For Approval
help with the hind leg line art pls ;u; 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

i think maybe bring the back leg bend (elbow) farther back a bit to where it goes past the base of the tail a little bit <span style="">21:43, 9/27/2019

actually no sorry scratch that, i think it looks good <span style="">21:44, 9/27/2019

Stagleap (TR) (W) ~ For Approval
good man 21:38, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

I think the texture should be in thinner lines and a lot sharper to match his set. -- 23:36, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 00:50, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (Alt. W 2) - For Approval
-- 23:33, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (K) ~ For Approval
04:11, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Stumpytail (K) ~ For Approval
04:11, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (W) - For Approval
this was really hard oml

Sleekwhisker (K) - For Approval
matched to the rogue file. 15:41, September 28, 2019 (UTC)