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Brackenwing (Alt Star) ~ Declined
I tried. 01:22, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Her eyes need to be green. 01:24, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

I see some waste near the paw on >>> side, and where's the light source on the tail? 01:24, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Very pretty! Define the shading on the foreleg closest to us? 01:27, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:22, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little? 0:01 Thu Jul 25 2013

I think the shading's fine, but if others agree, I will. 14:36, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I think a little lighting would be alright. Also, on her tail, there is some shading on the middle of her tail that doesn't quite match the light source; could you kind of erase that? 17:33, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I need this approved soon; I'm going to Indiana for vacation tomorrow, and I won't have Internet access. 22:32, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

There seems to be 2 strips of lighter coloring on her belly/side & her shoulder. Could you smooth that out? c:  23:31, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That was from my failed attempt to create texture. I got rid of that. 00:20, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, the arm, and the chest. 21:15, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

I think there fine; however, I'll fix if others agree. 20:13, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Icy, also define the chest highlight. 20:19, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I just don't have the time right now. 21:46, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over. 21:57, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Actually, scratch that. I've found something else I'd like to work on. 23:32, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over. ☼We are the crazy people☼ ~Ke$ha 23:57, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

How does she look? ~Dawn

The file needs to be named File:Brackenwing.star.alt.png. ^^;;

Add more depth to her eyes. 10:41, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the shoulders, chest, legs and head please, it looks very flat. Also, define the unshaded part on the shoulder and legs. 13:23, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think the shading could be smoothed out, but let me know if I'm wrong. ☼We are the crazy people☼ ~Ke$ha 14:11, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm. I'm not sure... well, maybe squash the flank shading down a bit? Eek I can't explain things at all 15:14, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

I don't agree Sorrel, I think the chest looks fine, but if anyone else thinks not, I will change it. ☼We are the crazy people☼ ~Ke$ha 16:39, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

Er, the flank is the side, but anyways, you may want to extend the neck shading on the (our) left side of the head and define the tail shading. 03:51, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC">☼We are the <font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="blue" face="Tempus Sans ITC">crazy people☼ <font color="pink" face="Tempus Sans ITC">~Ke$ha 00:40, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading and light source on the tail. 00:42, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Dawn!!

Define eye depth <span style="">02:29 Sun Aug 4

Remove the bit of shading on the top of her back (by her muzzle)? Looking pretty! 11:54, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts on her tail and paws? ^^  13:36, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks Sorrel! Re-ups <font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC">☼We are the <font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="blue" face="Tempus Sans ITC">crazy people☼ <font color="pink" face="Tempus Sans ITC">~Ke$ha 01:46, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, and I know shading darkness is artists choice, but is it possible if you could lighten the shading on the back? It looks *very* dark. 21:32, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

The shading on the head doesn't make sense with the light source; maybe try putting it on this--> side of the head? Also, can you define the shading on the tail? Nice job! 23:09, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks! And I tried the diferent style of shading, which I am very proud of! Re-ups! <font color="lightblue" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><span style="text-shadow: 10px 10px 10px, 10px 10px 10px, 10px 10px 10px Midnight blue;">Si <font color="lightblue" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="lightblue" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="blue" face="Tempus Sans ITC">ber <font color="darkblue" face="Tempus Sans ITC">ia 00:42, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be defined. 13:39, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

And perhaps darken it a little, too? 17:11, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 21:40, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, family problems. I'll upload tonight. <font color="lightblue" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><span style="text-shadow: 10px 10px 10px, 10px 10px 10px, 10px 10px 10px Midnight blue;">Si <font color="lightblue" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="lightblue" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="green" face="Tempus Sans ITC"><font color="blue" face="Tempus Sans ITC">ber <font color="darkblue" face="Tempus Sans ITC">ia 01:46, August 13, 2013 (UTC) Chest shading is caving. Erase out a highlight to make it less flat. This is wonderful, Dawn~ <span style="">00:24 Thu Aug 15

This hasn't been uploaded in over a week, declining due to lack of work.