Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
She needed to be redone to match others she was on the list. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 03:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the unshaded bits brighter, they sorta look shiny on the other images. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 03:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda greenish. Make her a little more orange. 03:33, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:10, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and define the earpink. 20:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:51, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the image a tad and add highlights so it matches the other images. 05:49 Sat Jan 7

Also, lighten the whole image just a tad. 03:57, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:02, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add/brighten highlights so this looks shinier (like the other images) 02:02 Tue Jan 10

Coal (Ro) ~ Redone
Yay! My first tweaked charart! Just to tell you, I use highlights and right now they're blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

OA and why did it have to be redone? 23:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the whole thing, I can't see the lineart 23:53, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the redo list and OA is Blackclaw09. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:58, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink. 00:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

His ears are facing <---that way though. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:39, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but they should still be centered. That's the placement. 00:47, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

But, the earpink placement for Shadepelt's elder would have to be centered, then. I think it's fine. 00:49, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If is ear-pink facing ←← this way, i think you should add it on the second ear too. ,18:25,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   2012! The end of the world?  14:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pelt more, and maybe enlarge the highlights 06:36, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  21:45, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights a tad. 01:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Milkfur (WC) (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be done as shorthaired. OA was Moonflight, comments? 08:27, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some haunch shading, and blur alot. Sky-  Lather. Rinse. Obey. 09:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that light parts alot ,18:20,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it. 20:07 Thu Jan 5

It looks like there is blurred lineart on the haunch. 20:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You know you didn't actually have to redo it? You can just layer the shorthaired lineart over the original version. See the tutorial if you don't know how. 22:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and there's some missing lineart on the front paw and a few other places. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad more. 03:44, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Dapple? 22:23, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:07, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

(If this isn't a highlight, just ignore what I say ;)) Tone down the highlight on the tip of the tail. It looks really bright. O.o 23:12, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made it a bit darker. 23:33, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make him a slightly creamier colour? Sky-  Lather. Rinse. Obey. 23:46, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

The color is from the old image. 01:10, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

It does look a bit too white, and it's his only image anyway. It wouldn't hurt to make it a bit more creamy color. 01:26, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Blur the earpink more. 23:13 Wed Jan 11

The base pelt color seems okay...The long haired version was the same. =P 01:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Gorsetail (P3) (W) ~ Redone
Okay, it was on the redo list because the patches need to be lighter and shading needs to be redone. OA= Flamingomom3 with a redo/tweak by Moonleaf. Comments? 00:07, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the patches on her front legs and hind foot closest to us darker. It was only a tweak. 00:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Tone done zee highlights please. 00:01 Tue Jan 10

Reuploaded. Deleted the highlight layer. 02:14, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Ivy, but... could you change the pattern? This pattern makes it look like it's a white cat with bad shading, sorry. :C 02:21, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not fond of the pattern either. =3 I'll redo it and have it up soon. 04:15, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Little Mew (Ki) - Tweak
Needed to be short haired. OA - was Dawnfeather/Sandstar with a redo, it looks like by Shelly. Comments? 05:43, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Crapp~ I fail. I'll get the lineart on the back paw. 05:46, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:48, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:41, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:52, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Aww.. define the earpink. 01:19, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Reuploaded =3 20:09, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lizardstripe(Q) - Redone
Well, she is on the list, her shadings are blotchy, stripes too...she needs really redone..OA is Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire :-) Arrg that stripes are confusing xD I was trying the new way of tabbies but everything wasnt looking good on her o_O ,10:13,January 7,2012 (UTC)

'Cause she's a heartless evil little cat that Brokenstar hopefully killed. Darken the ear-pink a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:57, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

No, she died for greencought, nevermind... Reuploaded ,19:18,January 7,2012 (UTC)

Define the edges of the white 05:17, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ruploaded ,11:28,January 8,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad more visible and slightly less purply? Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 04:03, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded *dont kill me* ,17:39,January 9,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller 02:38, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Its not needed ,20:07,January 10,2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a bit? It looks like a field of wheat is printed onto her pelt. 20:11, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe she found some and made her nest from it xD Ahh reuploaded ,20:30,January 10,2012 (UTC)

I agree with Gurdain, make the earpink smaller please. It's too big. <span style="">23:21 Wed Jan 11

Darken the shading. This looks wonderful! 01:04, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,14:18,January 12,2012 (UTC)

Firestar (KP) ~ Redone
I had time to put him up! 8D Anyways, OA was Night Shine, with major tweaks by Ivystripe, comments for improvement? 02:29, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Not major tweaks by me, it was redone by me. Sorry it's just a little irritating for me 03:01, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I should have realized. XD Sorry. 03:10, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think (since we're going by Paleh's design) you should ask Paleh to send you her .xcf file so the colours completely match. Sound okay to you? <span style="">05:14 Sun Jan 8

Reuploaded. Well, I saw the change of style, so I redid it. =P 01:02, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the collar and make the earpink a tad bigger and I'd say this is ready to archive. Well done. 01:09, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Ivy! 01:55, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (L) - Redone
Many OAs for this: Bramble, Night Shine, Squirrelflight, Rainlegs, and a redo by Icestorm123. I had had a different design for Firestr, but Paleh uploaded hers first and it's not fair to make everyone doing one of his images completly throw away their hard work. 05:12, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think (since we're going by Paleh's design) you should ask Paleh to send you her .xcf file so the colours completely match. Sound okay to you? <span style="">05:13 Sun Jan 8

Well you reserved first Ivy, so I personally think you should pic. I just didn't want to wait for you to post since I didn't know how long it'd be. But if we do keep this design, yes, I'd be happy to send you the .xcf file. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:00, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'd say go by what the user on the talk page said. Make him look less like a dark ginger cat and lighten the stripes a bit. You could still go by the image I cited. Or you could even go ahead and make him the same color as Squirrelflight. 02:51, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Ya still working on this Ivy? If so, smudge the stripes and the pale chest, and there's waste above the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:48, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok, I kept the same pattern but I took some of Shelly's advice: using Squirrelflight's colors, and I tried making him long-furred. I tried to make it so it would disrupt as little in the other pictures as possible. The shading also has a flame-tint to it. 18:43, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

(has to tweak my alt now, dang) Looks pretty good! Very flame colored, that's for sure. :3 Just define the shading a bit, I can't tell where it is. 19:03, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait, no I don't. He's short furred on that cover. 19:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded me gusta  19:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I said everything about this I needed to on chat already, but I really do think he should be shorthaired. He was mentioned many times with short fur before. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

If that's so, Paleh, could you put it in his description with a cite to end all arguments on the subject? 19:09, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

He looks awesome, but I honestly think he should be short-haired. Just because it says he has thick fur doesn't nessisarilly make him long-haired. Look at Gorsepaw. His description says he has short, thick fur. Just sayin' (Besides, long-hairedness is a recesive gene). 19:46, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Shelly, don't have any of the OS books where I know he was called short-furred. Can't cite it. Though I'm going to the library soon and can try and get some books. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:11, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

He should remain short-furred. No sense trying to fix something that isn't broken. 23:18, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Alright. Whenever you can if fine with me. Just want to end all arguments on this. If anyone else that sees this has the OS books and can find a cite, please do so. 23:19, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tired of disagreeing with people (no I'm not saying that to be mean I'm just tired of wanting to keep him long furred)  00:01, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste where the tail starts. 00:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also found more waste  02:17, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Songbird (Q) ~ Redone
Redone because it was blotchy, tinted green, and the tabby pattern was unrealistic. OA=Icestorm123, later redone by Dappleclaw, then tweaked a bit by Dappleclaw and Nightshine. (I think) 16:55, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the unshaded parts a bit. (Might just be me though) <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 21:17, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

... okay. Smudge the stripes to be less solid. 22:49, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudges the white some more. Define the shading 23:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the brown up too, seeing as she's a light brown tabby. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:43, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

And if you want the tabby pattern to be realistic as you said, ditch the triangles. 02:46, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ah, idiot me. :P But, I have to withdraw this due to a very busy week. 01:06, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 01:07, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I Re-Uploaded.' I completely redid it... comments? 01:42, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Connect some of the stripes along the body. It doesn't make much sense for stripes to radiate from the spine and stomach and never meet. 01:52, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) - Redone
Before anyone says anything, he was on the redo list. His shading was blotchy and his stripes needed to be redone. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 01:47, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

You stole my spot. >:( Anyways, darken the shading. <span style="">01:57, Tue, Jan, 10, 2012

Reuploaded 02:01, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think he should be more brown. Right now his colour looks similar to Squirrelfur's. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and stripes on the tail 02:36, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:54, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh, I like. Make him a little less ginger and enlarge and define the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:06, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more stripes on the unstriped parts of the body. 20:25, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:11, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Dawncloud (W) - Redone
To match the others. Also blotchy shading ._. blotchy shading angers Wildy. <span style="">02:08 Tue Jan 10

Quietstep was the OA :P <span style="">02:09 Tue Jan 10

Wildy rage is bad, only if Wildy is raging on ME. define the tail shading 02:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Q)- tweaked
Made her more brown, less green, fixed miscolored pixels, and filled in nose. Not much a difference really. Oa= Darkhallows 02:32, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should make her lighter. She looks dark brown, instead of just brown. 02:39, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, Im not so sure about that. Maybe not 02:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think this shade is fine. Can make the earpink a tad bigger? 02:55, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded 03:08, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit and make the back leg less ginger? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Same with the front paw furtherest from us. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 21:49, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

whoops, forgot to say Re-uploaded 23:56, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Quince (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Ashshadow and the shading needed to be blurred. 21:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it more, and fix the little gray tail tip thing. 01:02, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink should be bigger and paler, the eyes could use some depth, as could the collar, and the tag would benefit from a few near white pixels to make it look metal. 06:39, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Use the color #C7616F for the ear pink. That's directly from the kittypet image, as I still have the .xcf from when I fixed it up a while back. Not half bad, otherwise. =D 06:43, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Did you get permission to redo? Cause just a shading tweak shouldn't really qualify for a redo.... But if you have permission there's no problems. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:15, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I looked at the old file, and I now give my support to have it redone. If she wasn't going to do it, I eventually was. That image needed to have something done to it. The shading was blotchy and it just seemed off. Not everyone can tweak shading without re-doing it. 16:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Should the eyes be less blood red? Because they look like it. <span style="">00:39 Thu Jan 12

Also, blur the shading on the tail. =3 01:12, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:20, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Tornear (E) ~ Redone
OA was Nightfall101; stripes were strange and unrealistic and it was on the re-do list. Comments? 01:02, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a tad and blur the stripes. 02:15, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you put some stripes on the legs? 06:38, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Add more shading between the back leg and the tail. Breeze whisker  01:21, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:56, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Emberfoot (W) ~ Tweak
.xcf files are a lifesaver. I re-did the shading, and fixed up the eyes (they were all flat and one color) and the every-annoying ear pink. 16:40, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, darken the earpink and lighten the shading. 16:44, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't lighten it much, because I've taken a liking to darker shading. Re-uploaded. 16:49, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

The light source doesn't really make a lot of sense. There's no shading on the back of his head, but on his body, there's no shading closer to his belly. I suggest extending the shading on the head so it touches his ear. 21:27, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I've told you before, I do not use a light source. At least, not one that I know of. Re-uploaded. I took the shading from a different file of mine. 04:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lizardfang (E) - Redone
Well he is on the redo-list with stripes, shadings needs redone too. I decided make him, but right now i saw he is looking like dark with light stripes..hmm, my very first elder ever -_- OA is Sandstar12. *I failed with this* ,18:37,January 11,2012 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the stripes, I think. 19:01, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I love this pattern, anyways, it looks like the pattern on the tail is a continuous pattern of the body so you might want to change up the stripes on the tail as I don't think any cat has a continuous tabby pattern when they strike a pose like that. x3 01:09, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

They don't look like stripes at all ._. 03:07, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah no, not much... sorry. 03:10, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

experimenting* this? reuploaded ,14:34,January 12,2012 (UTC)

There is some waste along his haunch/tail area. 18:30, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,20:53,January 12,2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes some more? They look a little sharp. 03:05, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (W) - Redone
Ivy, you're lucky you're one of the few people I'd agree to actually do that. XD But I do love your Firestar image more than I can describe. XD I'm actually proud at my matching skillz (nonexistent) for once. XD OA was Quailflight, then a redo by Ivy, then by me, and no by me again. XD Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:35, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

D'oh, I forgot his torn ear. XD Well, reuploaded. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:02, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) ~ Redone
The shagding was poor and the ear-pink was to dark for a white cat. The OA was either Cloudy or Icecloud. I got permission to redo this from Ivy in chat a couple minutes ago by the way. Comments for improvement? 19:41, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and thicken out the shading on the haunch. Define the ear-pink and blur it. <span style="">23:10 Wed Jan 11

I'm not a fan of the earpink. Make it darker and redder. Breeze whisker  01:17, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:22, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I forgot some waste between the legs. Fixed that. 19:33, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:55, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the tail 'highlight' curve with the tail more, and if she has shading on the back of her head and ears area, darken it to match the rest of the shading. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  05:37, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (D) - Redone
Might as well post it up not so I can get onto another charart sooner. :P Everything was copied and pasted from the warrior image except the tail and front paw farthest from us. OA was Insane, then redone by Ivy. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:56, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm....I was looking over the warrior image, and somehow, I turn out to be either a OA or a tweaker....so I know all about this. So...Blur stripes, and perhaps the chest. Great job, Paleclaw! 21:30, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

They're as blurred as they are on the leader image. *has the xcf file* I'd rather not change them, but if someone else agrees, I will. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:33, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Adderfang (D) - Redone
OA was Honeyfur and then it was tweaked by Maplepool. I wanted to redo them both, because even before the dapples were added, they didn't look much like each other. Thoughts? 00:45, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Shrink the earpink and define the shading. <span style="">00:48 Thu Jan 12

Give him a more realistic tabby pattern. All the triangle tabbies are being redone for a reason. 01:13, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid it with colors from his warrior. 03:16, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripe? He looks like he rolled around in mud (no offense, it just all kind of blends together) 04:12, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:20, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 05:58, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (L) - Redone
Not sure about the OA...Shimmerpool, Mousetalon, Pockystar, with a redo by Mintstarr. As much as I liked her old image we decided on changing her color. 01:03, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I still think this needs to match Mistystar. No cat is cobalt colored. 01:05, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly, even though is is epic! :D <span style="">01:11 Thu Jan 12

Failure, I meant this. <span style="">01:13 Thu Jan 12

Yeah, blue-grey cats aren't really blue. Also, could you maybe make the silver go onto her chin. Right now, she looks like she's got a mustache. XD Breeze  whisker  01:25, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Honestly, I really don't feel this looks like Bluestar anymore :/ Majority rules. 01:40, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit off. Just do what I did: pick the color off a picture of a Russian blue and add blue highlights. That's just my suggestion, though! 01:42, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Her highlights look tinted green, make them more blue. <span style="">01:46 Thu Jan 12

There are no highlights on this >.> On her color I slid the blue over to be more gray. All I did. 01:49, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot the shoulder scar. o3o <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Hissing noises. 02:19, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, It looked like it... <span style="">02:22 Thu Jan 12

Then the blue was greenish in color, because it really does appear slightly green. Breeze whisker  04:09, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I feel like this is my first try at Leafstar's queen all over again :(  02:42, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Now she looks a bit purple... seriously, it's a lot easier and more realistic looking if you did it how I did. Grey base. Blue highlights. 03:57, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

huh, looks more purple on Bluestar than on Stormtail dear. Maybe just make it a biiiiit blue-er. And Shelly, to be completely honest, I think Misty could have been blue-er. But she's already approved, so whatever. But I do think that Bluestar should stay like this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:53, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Cody (KP) - Tweaked
Nine. Freakin. Layers. OA=Darkhallows and the collar needed to be removed, earpink tweaked 03:59, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck a little less ginger. Good job. :) Also, I know it's the artist choice, but is there any chance of you changing the eyes? Honestly, this style always creeped me out. That's just me though. I'll understand if you don't want to. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:35, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

The tail seems to be a different shade of brown then the rest of the body.. It also looks a bit ginger on the muzzle area. 18:28, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded -Eh, decided the tail and eyes were fine 02:39, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (PH) - Redone
Darkened the color, as he is described as a "dark gray tom". All of his chararts besides for his apprentice are a bit too light. Took all the colors from his apprentice (except for the mud). OA was Kittycat79, I think. Comments? 03:59, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I out-posted you. 8D Sorry bout that, heheheh 04:05, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

...Oh yeah I forgot, blur the shading 04:09, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:20, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste on top of the shoulder 18:32, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:21, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Echosong (KP) ~ Redone
The stripes needed to be redone. This was on the redo list. OA was Hiddensun and was redone by Rainwhisper. Comments? 01:58, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink smaller and blur it. - 02:41, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:58, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

The tail shading looks flat, pretty! 03:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Ivy :D DeRp I forgot the dark gray paws. 03:45, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Try to make the stripes curve around her back rather than flow in a diagonal line. 03:54, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I redid the stripes because Shelly commands it X3 04:37, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) ~ Redone
Eh. Comments? 02:10, January 13, 2012 (UTC)