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Stormcloud (Ki) - For Approval
First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png ​​​

The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. -- 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. -- 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

My art program doesn’t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe

01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe it’s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading 00:42, 9/28/2019

Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesn’t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading over all? 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me if it’s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch.  W i n d s o n g   (talk)   09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink color and darken the stripes a tad. 17:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Welp I tried --Wavetail (talk) 00:40, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes on the body (not the tail). His images show they are just as smudged as the tail stripes. -- 00:42, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna take a while --Wavetail (talk) 00:58, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Someone pls give me something to improve on I’m DYING without anything to work on --Wavetail (talk) 00:11, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

From what I've seen, you can ask for comments after 3-5 days have passed. As for the image, I think the stripe color is still too light and the tail stripes should be slightly thicker to cover more of the tail. -- 00:13, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this is better Potato --Wavetail (talk) 01:27, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Hiiii Wavetail!! I love the stripes! Can you smudge the earpink?  Crystie  Can't help  loving  me  14:24, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I over smudged it :P --Wavetail (talk) 23:37, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, I think the earpink could be smudged more. -- 23:40, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

If it isn't already, add the earpink layer under the shading possible? At the moment it looks very flat compared to the area around it which is covered in shading

Could you darken the shading tint? it kinda blends a bit with the stripes at the moment. 15:13, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a tad? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:36, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smudge the earpink as in shading or earpink and fur? --Wavetail (talk) 01:39, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Stripes seem a touch too dark compared to the other images

Reuploaded Too light or too dark?--Wavetail (talk) 22:53, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Too dark, I'm pretty sure she said. Lighten and smooth out the shading and the earpink still seems too... neonish? 04:27, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Will do. Also, I meant if it is still too dark or if I made it too light --Wavetail (talk) 05:26, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Try the following hexcodes for colours; #828282 for the base colour, #575759 for the stripes, and maybe #703F42 for the earpink - those should help match a little more?

Smooth the shading on the cheek --Moo (talk) 07:15, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 2) - For Approval
Here is your proof Potato can do tabbies that are not pointed. Very proud of this one. -- 00:59, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly match him more to his manga appearance?

Reuploaded I think this matches- added a white tail-tip, more white to the back paw, more stripes on the forehead, and thinned the stripes to match the tabby style. -- 22:57, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be less stripes to match. I'd also, if you're amendable, recommend the eye color be made to match the main set (at least for the most part)

Reuploaded This better? -- 22:42, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Getting so. If one lets go of the past warrior, simply look at what you'd do if making it for the manga rn, and adjust the stripes. Notably, the base on the manga is lighter, the stripes thicker, the haunch one goes to a point and not all the way across, they are more sketchy and not simply drawn, and there are stripes directly next to where the white is on each leg and the tail. Is what I'm noticing so far, do attempt to notice whatever else

Reuploaded will add face stripes momentarily -- 23:49, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow this actually matches in terms of sketch and thin -- 23:52, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the haunch one a little further - make it longer, that is, and smooth the haunch shading. Definitely got what i meant otherwise, thanks

Reuploaded Thanks Spooky! -- 00:11, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be one more stripe on the body. Maybe move the one on top of the haunch slightly lower and add the other one along the flank. Also, I think the stripe on the flank could taper out some more to a point. The head stripes could also resemble the ones on the manga a bit more. They seem to curve over the eyebrows a bit more and there aren't as many on the manga. 15:39, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded These stripes are going to be the end of me. -- 16:06, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. 04:28, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you taper the stripes towards the end? In the manga art they are very triangular in shape, while maintaining that "brushy" style - kinda like I did on on this manga character

Reuploaded -- 23:01, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Jayclaw (K) - For Approval
Ok lets try this again! Moo (talk) 03:36, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading on the ear fluff behind the ear closest to us? Looks like it's leaking shading there. 15:44, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:21, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the facial shading so it curves with the shape of the face; it shouldn't stretch all the way to the eye, but rather curve and also cover the chin

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 05:22, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smokehaze (K) - For Approval
-- 21:14, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink a bit more? Looks a little blotchy. 15:46, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 16:06, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch doesn't seem to follow the light source, as everything else suggests the light source is pointing ->, while the haunch seems to have the light source pointing downwards.

Could I get a second opinion? I've used the very same source on several of my kits, and there are similar images to those I have made. -- 00:04, October 7, 2019 (UTC)

Just curve it up a little more on >> this side, to match what I did on Fallowkit. It does make sense in a way as is, but, curving to follow the natural shape would help push it to look more flowy with the source

Reuploaded -- 00:11, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading just a little bit

Reuploaded -- 23:01, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Lionheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
-- 15:51, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make his eye colour match a little more to the main set? It. Might just be my screen at the moment though, so apologies if they do match. Al the shading on << that part of the mane doesn’t really match this source? What I’d do instead is have some shading underneath, near the line art to give the illusion that the mane is a 3D object - I can redline when I’m not browsing by handheld

It is probably your screen as the eye color matches to the set on mine. -- 20:42, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

That’s fine,but the other half of my comment still stands.

Reuploaded Indeed. -- 20:47, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

maybe add just a little bit of shading under the chin, connecting to the shading on >> this side of him? if that makes sense?

Reuploaded -- 00:11, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

red is add shading, blue is remove some - sorry I should've clarified the first time

Reuploaded -- 23:01, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Sorrelpaw (WC) (K) ~ CBA


Could you darken the shading some?

re-up yeet

CBA?

Stormheart (W) ~ CBA
04:24, October 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Silverflame (W) - For Approval
17:11, October 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Perhaps add some more of the lighter ginger on the eyebrows? 23:10, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Moonlight (Leader) - For Approval
17:34, October 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you define the shading depth?

Maybe “poof”-ify the tail, like the other images have? I’m not seeing that edited tail here. ​

Darken the dark parts? 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Snowbird (Ki) - For Approval
i won't withdraw this, i promise. 02:28, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a lot, but, also maybe use less? Sometimes white cats can be painfull with shading so by using less you can save yourself a lot of trouble. Also add some shading to >> that side of the cat, behind the tail

'''reuploaded. 14:44, October 8, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the shading overall and add ear shading to the ear closest to us? 23:14, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Swallowtail (WC) (W) - For Approval
03:56, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Should I remove eye shading? 14:53, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, and define the light on the tail? 23:15, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:59, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Sol (K) ~ For Approval
I wanted to give myself a challenge. Tinystream (talk) 12:29, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

the patches are a lot more streaky and uniformed rather than what you have here. it looks a lil too blurry 20:37, 10/08/2019

Gravelnose (K) - For Approval
18:38, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) (K) ~ For Approval
23:12, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reedfeather (W) ~ For Approval
23:12, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (K) - For Approval
Mothflight kit <3 Colorpicked from her hunter image. 01:19, October 10, 2019 (UTC)