Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Whitewing (Q)- For Approval
--My first charart. I did the best I could. Comments =) Darkmoon25'

She is completely white. Don't worry, when I started making charart, I would be that with white cats too. You need to make it a light gray, because if it's totally white, then shading won't work. Do you know how to shade? Because if not I could teach you.-- ♥Halloweenclaw 13:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

There's a few blurry sections of Lineart, and the shading should probably be thickened a bit. I can't see anything. XD (But that might be just me) The ear pink should be blurred out, and in a triangle shape. But don't worry, it's pretty good for your first charart! :) Just a suggestion; If you already know this, i'm very, very sorry. But you should go to http://pixlr.com/editor and use that. Using that program you can use the blur tool to blur shading and ear pink (Be careful not to go over lineart, and if you do, just open up paint and go over the black lines with the pencil tool) and you can use the 'Burn' tool to darken parts, etc. Once again, I'm very sorry if you already knew about pixlr. =)  Shistar BOO! 15:16, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Shigura covered it all.-- *Minn owc law*  15:17, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the one cheek and behind the ear, it is lighter than the other spots. --Mosspath  of Skyclan 15:29, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

For shading, use the burn tool. (if you already know this, ignore me), and run it over the back, hind leg, and other places that have shading. --Rainwhisker 09 19:25, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

Okay, the lines that were blurred are a bit too thick now. And there still isn't any shading. XD (I checked. XP) There should be a few white pixels in the eye, (Look at Ferncloud's eye to see how it should look) And the ear pink should still be more triangular and blurred along the outside. =)  Shistar Mai Talk Page! =) 17:22, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

There are only still some white parts near her face and her ear.-- *Minn owc law*  23:13, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

(S) - Maybe it's me, but the eye looks turquoise. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:29, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

hmm... my main problem is that you've now made her so far off-white that she looks pale grey... =/ Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:40, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Make the shading darker also, and blur the ear pink slightly as it looks like it is now painted on. (ps. please sign with ~ so we can see the timestamp, thanks) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:35, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, pretty much what Sandy said. Also, to make her less pale gray, use the dodge tool at about size 70, and the brush that gets lighter out. (Please disregard if you knew this.)-- Mossy SC  22:33, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

re uploaded. I lightened her and darkened the shading. also changed eye color. finally i Blurred the ear pink. please approve this! Darkmoon25

I don't know, she still looks pale gray to me--Nightfall101 23:40, November 10, 2009 (UTC) I dont see anywhere she is pale grey. Except for the shading.Darkmoon25

(S) - I can tell you changed the eye, but maybe make it a darker green, like on her warrior image. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:18, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25

I have a few things and although I don't often do them, I've drawn you a diagram (yay!) to help show you what I mean.

Okay: the red circle shows where I don't think you need the shading as it wouldn't go around the whole lineart of the tail. The purple shows where you need to add shading, the blue shows where the lieart is blurred. You also need to blur all the shading into the pelt as it's quite messy. The background needs to be made transparent and the ear pink is too bright (I put a patch of the colour I would recommend next to the ear although there are other colours that can be used on white cats and look good) Hope this helps =) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:16, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25

Darken the belly shading more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:46, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 Darkened the belly shading

Almost there. Just blend the shading and make the ear pink more triangular and she'll be ready, I think. [Note: you don't have to upload under a new file name each time, just choose a name that's something like: Whitewing.queen.png or Whitewing(Q).png or Whitewing_Q.png and reupload over the old one each time instead of having whitewingqueen2, whitewingqueen3 etc. These extra files just clog up the wiki] Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:43, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Ok i will get to that. But I tried to upload files on the old image but my changes are not being shown. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

Sometimes it takes a few minutes to change. I find that often mine don't change for a couple of days: I'm not quite sure why but it may be something to do with temporary files stored on your computer, or it may just be the wiki being slow. The best person to ask would be Eu. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:16, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 It showed my changees! Anyways I blended the shading and change the ear pink shape. Is it ready?!=)

(M) - Almost. There's a bit of blurred lineart on the tail, and the shading on the belly looks darker than the rest. Also, the ear pink is too bright and needs blurred more. Fix those things and then she should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:52, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I dont see any blurred lineart but i will work on the other stuff later tonight.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

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Just think the shading on the belly a bit and blur it, and she'll be ready. :) Nice job. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:27, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 blurred belly shading.

I think it needs to be blurred a tad more.-- Darkhallows 11:08, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 This has gotta be ready now.

Make the ear pink a little bit thicker at the bottom of the ear pink so that it's similar to the lineart of the ear pink. Also, this may just be my laptop, but I think this still looks like a light gray. Run the dodge tool over it once or twice (making sure the eye color stays the same and doesn't get lighter) and it should be good. --  Icy -chan  01:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

OK i will try to thicken the ear pink. and on my computer it does not look gray. Why does everybody have to find problems with my art just when it was gonna get approved? any way how do u like my Christmas siggie?<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

It does look a little grey to me too. People find problems with your art because they're trying to help you improve it for the benefit of the wiki; it's not a personal thing. (Also, nowhere here can I see that it was about to be approved) And yes, your siggie is cool. I need a christmas one, I'm feeling left out ^_^ Sandy   Talk   16:44, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Lightningpelt- For approval
A minor character. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 00:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

The white streak on her back would probably be on the lineart, rather than on the side of the pelt like it is now. Otherwise, great job, Hawkfire! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:26, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Icethroat, and also make the ear pink more of a fine triangular shape, and less of a bright pink color. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦ <font color="Purple">Contribs 01:49, November 9, 2009 (UTC) Awesome! Um I don't really see anything *goes closer* Nope &#91;&#91;User:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;background:silver; color:goldenrod;&quot;&gt;&#39;&#39;&#39;Icestorm&#39;&#39;&#39;&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;sup&gt;&#91;&#91;User Talk:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;color:blue;&quot;&gt;How&#39;s the prey running?&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;/sup&gt; 02:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Make sure you make it slightly smaller, as we probably wouldn't be able to see it all. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:04, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the streak on the back, and worked on her stripes and ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 19:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

nice work. but now I can hardley see the streak. maybe make it a bit bigger and longer. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

Your tabby stripes seem to be blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:56, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 23:11, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok the image still looks good. but I can hardly see the ear pink and the streak looks more like a patch now then a streak. But good job <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

This hasn't been updated in awhile. Please update soon.-- Darkhallows 11:04, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 19:36, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart around the neck area, and the lineart on the back is a bit too thin. Also, the ear pink is touching the bottom of the ear when it should be a fine triangular shape, kept inside the ear lineart. Fix these things, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a week; please work on it or it will be declined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Snowfur (Q): For approval
Well she died as a queen so here ya go.



Comments? --Bluestar1776 22:23, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Some of the lineart on her ears are blurred a lot, and I can barely see any color on her nose. Also, there definately has to be some shading, and I would maybe blur the gray on the ear that's farthest from us (her left ear), it looks like a circle--Nightfall101 22:27, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - sharpened ears, darkened nose. --Bluestar1776 23:17, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add color to the nose, make the lineart on her hindleg and her front leg that is closest to us black, and lighten the eyes. Also add shading. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:38, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened lineart, colored nose. --Bluestar1776 16:03, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Drumroll, please!! *drumroll drumroll drumroll* Thanks, Echo, for showing me how to do the shading! --Bluestar1776 19:21, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I an kind of see that there is shading but you need to darken it slightly. Use the burn tool and rn it over a few times. Then use the blur tool to blend the shding in. Also, the ear pink needs to be more triangular Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:15, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened shading, fixed ear pink. Lol, is it blurry enough for you? Hahaha I'm just kidding it sucks. --Bluestar1776 17:12, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I put up two versions. The second one is a thousand times better, in my opinion. --Bluestar1776 17:29, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

I still can't really see the shading on either version and you've now blurred the lineart... more noticeably on version1. Use the burn tool to darken the shading and then fix the blurred lineart. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:03, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart, mostly on the forepaws and belly. And you don't need to put the image at the end of the section, because the changes appear above. And don't forget to leave your sig so we know who you are. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:10, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Don't know if it's just my computer, but it looks like her shading turned into spots on top of her spine. don't know if it just me or not. --Honeyrose34 23:35, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

You're right about the shading Honeyrose. Try and brush it up a little, make it straighter and more even. --Nightfall101 03:15, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - fixed the shading. --Bluestar1776 19:11, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Looking good. But I would lighten the shading on her belly and chest, it looks like it's gray there instead of just shaded--Nightfall101 21:59, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - should I lighten it any more? --Bluestar1776 22:11, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's coming along great! Try and even it out on back though, it still looks a little bumpy--Nightfall101 22:14, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - lightened the shading on the back. --Bluestar1776 22:19, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I have to eat dinner, will work on it more after. --Bluestar1776 22:21, November 17, 2009 (UTC)



The red is where the lineart is blurred, and the blue is where the shading needs to be darkened--Nightfall101 22:58, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I fixed the areas you said to. Better? --Bluestar1776 00:22, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It's getting a lot better! But, all the shading still needs to be both thickened and darkened--Nightfall101 00:27, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened the shading on the back. --Bluestar1776 00:51, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, but it's still hard to see. Thicken the shading on the back and tail, and try straightening it--Nightfall101 00:54, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I don't know what you mean by "thicken", but I did my best. --Bluestar1776 02:09, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Is the gray on the ear tip shading? It looks very sudden. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 14:48, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

It's not shading, Snowfur is supposed to have gray tipped ears. But the shading really needs some work, it looks bumpy and uneven--Nightfall101 21:15, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 23:33, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

The shading isn't as bumpy anymore, but it still needs to be evened out--Nightfall101 22:21, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you should get rid of the images that aren't being improved. I'm not really sure which one I should look at.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:20, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 14:51, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, the shading looks much better. But there is a spot at the base of the tail that's to dark, lighten it up a little. Also, you seem to have forgotten to put pupils in her eyes --Nightfall101 22:33, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I lightened that, and she does have pupils. --Bluestar1776 00:23, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

She's almost there. Just blur the shading a tad more (be careful not to hit the lineart) and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:31, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. Anything else? --Bluestar1776 19:47, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

I hate to keep commenting about this, but I can hardly see the shading anymore--Nightfall101 00:23, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well Nightfall, I think that may be your imagination. I know because one time you told me to fix the shading. I didn't do ANYTHING and posted "reuploaded" and you said it was much better. I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Bluestar, this isn't about catching other users out, it's about getting good quality images for the articles. This project is a team. Teams trust each other and if you said you'd reuploaded then it is assumed you've actually made the changes... I can't see the shading much either so you need to make it darker. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:01, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well it's just that every time I change it it's to dark, then I change it again and it's too light. Then I don't change it all and it's PERFECT. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Reuploaded - Too dark now? -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

(S) - Could you blur the shading a bit more? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:50, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

It should be blurred more, I think.-- Darkhallows 11:09, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred it, but you can't really see it... -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

The ear pink colour is too bright. Make it like the colour in  Sandy <span style="font-family:Freestyle Script;color:Goldenrod;"> Talk   20:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - fixed ear pink, is it too big? -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

The ear pink looks fine. Thicken the shading on the back some more, make the eyes look more like the eyes on Willowpelt's queen image, Lilyfur, or Splashheart, and part of the lineart on the belly looks blurred. Otherwise, great job! -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:52, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Logfur-For Approval
This is Logfur. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:46, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the stripes or lighten the pelt because it's hard to see them.-- *Minn owc law*  20:18, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the image looks very dark and very red and there seems to be some paler grey/white on the lineart. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:25, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

The image is really really dark. The image needs lightened a lot. Try the dodge tool on 100% size 100 or 200, so you get the entire image. Use the tool about three or four times, or maybe six or seven. Until you think it's bright enough, which you'll probably know. Also, the lineart does look gray in some areas. From what I can see of it, though, the tabby stripes look very nice. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:49, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat, it's waaaaay to dark. And I do see the gray lineart. But I really like the stripes!--Nightfall101 05:38, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

It did say Dark Brown but it looks like this is to dark :) I will do this ASAP. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:28, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Waaaaay to dark, I can barely see the stripes. The shading is good, though. --Bluestar1776 19:04, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I've brightened the brown colour, and removed the gray from the outline (replaced with black). Hope that's okay :) - Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:00, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Now it looks somewhat reddish rather than dark brown. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:07, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

I agree w/ Rainwhisker, maybe make it just plain dark brown, not to bright, not too dark. Do get what i am saying, my friends say that i talk like i'm from a diff country! Anyway, just don't make it too red looking. --Honeyrose34 23:32, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

I've made the fur more brown now. Let me know what you think :) - Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:23, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It looks redddish brown now. Try changing the color altogether instead of lighting it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 It looks brown to me, so I'd have trouble making it look more brown :). The RGB for it atm is 59-37-16 which is about the right ratio as far as I'm aware. - Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:58, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It looks better now, great job Bramble!! ( is okay if i call you that? just checking!) --Honeyrose34 00:23, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Honeyrose, you might not want to call Brambleclaw that because the fantastic leader of this project is a user named Bramble. I was confused and thought that you were mistaken when I saw the post and I think other people with be.-- *Minn owc law*  01:42, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

lol you can all call me Shruggy if you feel like it :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:11, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is a very strange colour. Try looking at some approved cats and choose a different shade. Um... I think Tigerstar is a good example Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:03, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy but if I try it goes brown...:/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:12, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

hmm....as he's a darkbrown cat I did the ear like a black cats ear. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:11, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, don't worry. Can you just blend it a tiny weeny bit and this should be good for approval. =) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:33, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

OK. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:42, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * Better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:33, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are layered right over the shading; they're lighter than the pelt, while in the regular pelt area, they're darker. The stripes around the mouth look odd, as well. -- Bramble -san  03:52, November 26, 2009 (UTC)


 * Oh no thats bad it rebooted but I had not saved logfur :/ I will see what I can do :). Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:05, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week, Shruggy. Please update or it will have to be declined Sandy   Talk   19:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry this has been so long. Better?

uhh..that was me. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 09:01, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed it a little better for you; it should be ready now. Great job on this, Shruggy. I also added transparency for the background. Comments before approval? -- Tinsel claw  01:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) - For Approval
Technically he died as a deputy, so here ya go. What do you think?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He's GGOD!!just add more the shading, and blur the ear pink. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#ff1493">Talk 04:12, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He needs a little more shading, and possibly highlights. Right now he looks flat.(I shouldnt say that, because the computer screen is flat) Ok, he looks 2-D.-- Shad owed  heart  12:59, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes don't have a pupil/highlight. --Bluestar1776 15:57, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and the lineart on the hind leg that is furthest from us is blured. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:32, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading, blurred the ear pink, and fixed the hind leg. He already has a highlight in his eye. I sort of made a highlight at the top of his head, but I'm having a little trouble with them.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  16:19, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like you darkened the shading rather than thickened it. Can you thicken it some more?-- Ashshadow My Clan 21:55, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well I darkened and thickened it, but I'll thicken it some more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:53, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

You need to add a bit more color to the eye, and add a pupil/highlight. Here's an example: (Don't critcize, I just made this in like 2 minutes and didn't bother with shading.) Anyway, see how his eye has more color? Lol sorry meh image ended up a little higher than yours. --Bluestar1776 22:02, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Er, I can't see the image.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  06:22, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Try using this as a reference on how to do the eye: --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 16:34, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading and fixed the eye.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:05, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the eye looks goo, but the shading needs blending. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:34, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Ignore me if you want to, but the eyes look kind of red to me. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:54, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the midriff, and the eye does look reddish, make it look more like the color of Lionblaze or Cora's amber eye color. Also, the shading could be blurred some more, it still looks bumpy in some spots. Otherwise, great job! --  Icy -chan  03:27, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the eye more orange-ish, and blurred the shading as much as I could.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  22:51, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The midriff still needs shading. Look at Bluefur's deputy image, or Ratscar for shading on the midriff. --  Icy -chan  22:02, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Ah, yes, now I see what you mean by midriff.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:01, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Daisyheart-- For Approval!
Here's my 1st, well...2nd. Besides that here's Daisyheart. Not fond of the name but thought she would be easy for me. Comments? Concerns? --Honeyrose34 00:16, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is a huge improvement! I would maybe thicken the shading a little more, and there's a line of white running through her whiskers where it should be ginger. Also, there is a lot of blurred lineart--Nightfall101 00:20, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Good job Honeyrose. I think you used the thumbnail version instead of the full size for the blank. Can you make it bigger?-- Ashshadow My Clan 00:29, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, i honestly don't know how, i didn't even realize till you said that. I just uploaded it up and it just did that. Please tell me how!! --Honeyrose34 00:31, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else, still don't know about picture size...--Honeyrose34 00:35, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

There's still some blurred lineart, and I can a spot that needs to be blurred right around the base of the tail--Nightfall101 00:41, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Okay how to make the Charart bigger (sorry you have to re-do it) You click on the blank on the PCA Project page. Then it will bring you to a page. You click on the blank again (left click) press "save picture as" then do what you nomarlly do. (Does this spund confusing?) I hope this helped you! <font color="#0000ff" style="background:Lime">Icestorm <font color="#add8e6" style="background:Blue">May StarClan Light Your Path! 00:47, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Icestorm-- i DO do that. I didn't have a problem with Whiskerpaw before. See him in the #25 declined at the bottom. You'll see what i mean.

Nightfall-- i don't know what you mean about the tail need to be blurred thing. Could you maybe upload my Daisyheart and then circle it or something, i don't understand.

Okay, any MORE comments!? --Honeyrose34 00:52, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I can post the full sized blank to your talk page if it would help.-- Ashshadow My Clan 01:01, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

That would be great. You know, this is the 2nd time you offered to save my butt. I thank you SO much. Do any of my real friends at school help? No, they don't like Warriors, only Twilight. Exept for one kid. I don't know what she like's to read. Back to the real world, thanks Ashshadow!!! --Honeyrose34 01:08, November 21, 2009 (UTC)



The red shows where the lineart is blurred--Nightfall101 01:22, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I managed to make it large for you, I did have to redo the eye, because the resizing killed it. I hope you don't mind.-- Darkhallows 11:39, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Shady: How on earth did you resize it without blurring it? I have longed to know how to do that. Honeyrose: The shading needs to be thicker and needs to be on the white as well as the ginger areas - try making your white slightly off-white so shading will show up. Also, blend your shading. The ear pink needs to be a central smallish triangle of a rosy/salmon pink colour ad blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:19, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

The edges were a little blurred, so I just made it a little bigger then the lineart and erased them. If that makes any sense.-- Darkhallows 11:52, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

!!!!!!!! I'm so excited! Thanks SO SO SO much! This helped me a WHOLE lot better, Shady. I'll fix the blurred spots Sandy and Nightfall. I know, i wasn't able to reply yesterday, but i went to see New Moon. It was really got but long because we had a half hour of credits to wait for more and more people to come in. Man, it took a long time but it was totally worth it!!! --Honeyrose34 15:35, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I was just editing her when i saw that i didn't blur the line art, the line art black just messed up the ginger when i was bluring. I'm right now trying to fix it. Sorry 'bout that kind of confusion! --Honeyrose34 15:43, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Forget my last comment, i almost forgot that Shady redid it for me. Man, i'm really dumb........... Sorry again. I'm on a roll w/ these 'sorrys'! --Honeyrose34 15:46, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -the new image is at the top. i just darkened the shading a tad. Any more comments? --Honeyrose34 16:02, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Still needs more shading. Then she should be good.-- Darkhallows 23:37, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Don't know if the shading that's new showed up or not so i'll redo it if i need to. any other comments besides that??? --Honeyrose34 21:20, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments, anyone? I need to get at least another comment! --Honeyrose34 22:36, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink, so darken it, and blur the ear pink. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 13:29, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the patches a bit more and darken the shading. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:37, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Didn't do ear pink but wanted to see your opinion of the shading before i do do it. I think it's too dark now, but that's for you guys to decide! Comments?? --Honeyrose34 21:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yep, the shading's too dark, and is really messy. Look here to see how to do the shading. (For the white part of the fur, put the burn tool on highlights at about 12 percent opacity.) I hope this helps! --  Icy -chan  23:06, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Icethroat, I don't know what you mean about the white fur shading, and I don't have highlights anyway. The shading tips on your page weren't that helpful 'cause I already did that but the white was just the problem. Could you or somebody else explain to me what you meant about the ' 12 percent thing. --Honeyrose34 16:21, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

If you're using pixlr or another similar editing programme you need to choose the burn tool and choose a size of around 15. What Icethroat is saying is that you need to select 'highlights' which is a type of burn tool and change the opacity to 12. If you're using pixlr this will all be at the top of the screen once you've selected the burn tool. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:11, November 26, 2009 (UTC) D

Do what Sandy said. And sorry I put another Daisyheart up for approval D:! I didn't even see yours up for approval. I promise it won't happen again. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 17:56, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

That's okay, Sandwich!! Everybody makes mistakes! Maybe you just didn't see it reserved, 'cause I'm WAY at the bottom since I'm new!! --Honeyrose34 15:28, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Now blur the shading. (I feel bad for saying that so much.)-- Darkhallows 11:12, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The shading just looks like bumpy gray lines. Even it out and blur it. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Reuploaded-- Hope that's better. Comments?? --Honeyrose34 21:19, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Better but the shading on the orange patch on her back looks really dark. also the shading needs to be blurred more.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:02, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

How should i do it? I tried multple things but nothing worked. My sister couldn't give me any ideas either. I need help on that. If you can answer soon, great! 'Cause there is s Christmas light-up-night in my town i want to go. Please help soon.-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

To lighten the shading on the back, run over it a couple times with the dodge tool (make sure its set at "midtones"). If you use Pixlr, the dodge tool looks like a ball on a stick. Be careful not to make the area your lihtening too light, though. Have fun at the light-up-night, by the way;) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 16:26, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Don't know if changes showed up or not. I'll rereupload it if I have to. Comments???-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reedfeather- For Approval
My second tabby. Comments?-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:01, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. I like the type of tabby stripes that you used. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:02, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Love it! I don't see anything right now. Keep it going! --Honeyrose34 23:05, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes on his hind paw that's closest to us should probably be blurred a little more. But this is great!--Nightfall101 23:21, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for all the nice comments. As for the stripes on the hind leg, it's the way their blurred that makes it look unblurred. They're so small that blurring them more dosent make a difference.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:31, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

I think this is ready. Comments before approval? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:39, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a lot more shading. On the head and neck area especially. -- Bramble -san  03:39, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Should I darken the shading in those areas?-- Ashshadow My Clan 15:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the highlight some. Is it better?-- Ashshadow My Clan 01:54, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really see the shading, add more.-- Darkhallows 11:15, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?-- Ashshadow My Clan 20:11, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Either darken the shading, or add a couple of highlights. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:53, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the highlights some more. Better?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:56, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add a highlight on the muzzle if there's not one already, it'll make the neck shading seem darker, and give it a good effect. Then it shuold be ready. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:03, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

When you say on the muzzle do you mean the whole muzzle or part of it?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:06, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, the whole muzzle. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 20:38, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded For some reason I don't think this is what you ment. Better?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:58, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, it is what I meant. :P But I forgot to add that you should also add another on the head, but make sure that the eye color doesn't get too light. Also, when you add the highlights, use the brush that is thicker in the middle and thinner like spikes on the outside, not the full brush. (If that made any sense...) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:25, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:38, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The highlight on the face looks spiky. Try blurring it some--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:40, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oops is this better?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:53, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Add some shading on the front leg (on the left, the one closest to us), and it should be ready. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:10, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reloaded Added the shading.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:32, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:33, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Dovestar-For Approval
This is Dovestar. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:25, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Nice work! Just lighten the shading a little bit. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 14:32, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

better? hope it's not to light :/. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 15:45, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. Just darken the ear pink a little and he should be good to go. The ear pink is really bright. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 16:18, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:31, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is still a tad too bright and it's too big. --Honeyrose34 21:12, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * Better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Now the ear pink is purplish. Try making it a light salmon-ish color instead. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:40, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

I know things are busy with the holidays and stuff, but please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:00, December 4, 2009 (UTC

yes hmm...I'm not sure how to get that color..:/ help? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Just run a pinkish color over the ear pink and blur it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 19:00, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

mist where sunlight shimmers~for approval
== well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it?? *santa pool*  07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --  Icy -chan  20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  pool*  07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.-- Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also Sandy   Talk   16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --  Icy -chan  21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better?? *Ivy pool*  06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Foxleap (W) -for Approval
Heees back up again because TFA came out! Yay! He was gathering dust in my files...-- ♥Sha dow edh eart♥  ♥Meow♥ ♥Prey♥  14:41, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

The image itself looks great, but it looks nothing like his apprentice image. His apprentice image and his warrior image should have the same style of tabby stripes. (It seems reasonable to do it that way.) But as I said, the image itself looks great! --  Icy -chan  16:03, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Icy's right. Is there any other cat this could be instead? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:43, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

It's a shame that he can't be Foxleap cuz this picture rocks! It's excatly how I picture him!--Nightfall101 05:09, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I searched everywhere for a reddish brown tabby, and a reddish brown cat. Unfortunately, I didn't find any. There was only Pinestar, Oakheart (who has a charat), and Foxleap. If you remove the tabby stripes, you could use this as Oakheart's warrior image. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 22:47, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

We're really going for consistency here... If you use the unsaturate tool and take the colour out you could turn it into a grey tabby... there are plenty of them. You'd have to add the ear pink ad eye colour again though. I just don't think it's right to have two images that are so different on the same article. Sandy  Talk   16:41, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Please decide on what to do or work on this soon, Shadowedheart. It hasn't been touched for 9 days. -- Tinsel claw  19:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (W)- For Approval
I ran out of file names for him. But Hawkey says he's ready. So what do you think? Oh and let me know if the changes don't show up. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 16:33, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Add higlights and blur the shadowing A LOT. Wait, is that the old or new image? <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:lime; background:magenta;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:lime;">Mousetalon Mousey! :)

I did add highlights. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:39, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Really? Did you use the dodge tool on the head too? :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined

I don't know. I'll do it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:45, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes won't show so I had to change the file name. Not sure if this is better or not <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:53, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Wow no more comments :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 23:48, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Yes there is, more coming at you! :) TGHe lineart looks unnaturally thick and the shading is too thick. Try smudginging the shading towards the linart (careful not to hit it) Gr.. stupid spelling mistakes. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:18, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

How do i un-thicken the lineart? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:39, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded GRRRRRRRRRRRRR had to CHANGE THE FILE NAME! Not sure if this is better or not. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart still looks blurred and thickened...to un-thicken the lineart, I think you make the inside of a blank transparent, and then paste the blank onto the image you already have. (or something like that, I don't know how to do it, though. Maybe someone else could explain a lot better for me?) Also, the shading it too thin on the inside of the hind leg right above the two hind paws, and all of the shading could be darkened some. Otherwise, great job! --  Icy -chan  21:45, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know how to put the blank on the image. But i'll do everything else. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:45, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Icy I don't know how to do that, Please help me do that! Someone! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Here you go. He needs tail shading.-- Darkhallows 00:31, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. Just what color code is this again? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 00:39, December 1, 2009 (UTC) (DECEMBER 1ST!)

Reuploaded I don't know the color code so could somebody tell me? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 21:36, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Wow no more comments. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:14, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

There is a white line on the tail.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 02:16, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I know. I need the color code to fill it in. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 13:04, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Im not sure what a color code is. If you mean those numbers and letters that show up when you change colors(if you use pixlr), use the tool that looks like a dropper.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:30, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah the numbers and letters. Do you mean the blur tool? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:00, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

No its called color picker tool and looks like a medicine dropper.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:04, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:17, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, it's way too bright right now. Also, the shading on the hind leg is too thick, try to thin it out some. --  Icy -chan  02:01, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">[[User:Icestorm123|Icestorm 02:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

WOW WOW wow WOW wow'' WOW no more comments. Come on peeps! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:17, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading as possible, and then blur the ear pink (and thin it if possible). Otherwise, great job. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:42, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this gets approved! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I have a couple of picky things. The ear pink is too dark now, run the doge tool over it a couple of times. Also, can you thin the ear pink on the other side, too? Last but not least, there's a gray line above one of the ears. (I know, they're picky.) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded So when is it approved? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:12, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some, blur the shading, and ighten the shading on the hond leg, it's darker than the rest of the shading. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:45, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink position higher--Nightfall101 06:50, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

How do I lighten the shading? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 12:54, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And run the dodge tool (the black ball next to the burn tool) over the highlights to lighten the shading.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:35, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lighten hind leg shading and blurred ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:01, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Okay any MORE comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:29, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Hareflight- For Approval
Here's Hareflight. Her description looked easy so I took a go at it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:49, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job, Hawkey. Just blur the shading and highlights a bit so that they don't look so messy, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:31, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the color a little bit more natural, right now it looks dul--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:35, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened color, and blurred shading and ighlights to the best of my ability. THe upload log works again! :D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 23:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the tips of it's paws, the fur gets lighter. Fix that unless it's part of the description of him. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - Maybe add some shading around the belly/middle section? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:05, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Coal (Lo) - For Approval
*shrugs* Not much to say about this one. Comments and suggestions? (Does the shading need blurred??) --  Icy -chan  02:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

He's awsome Icy!!! I think that the blurong is good except for the below part of the face. Hidden  -jimgle ♪  21:07, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Hiddensun! I'll get to it either tonight or tomorrow, I'm on my mom's laptop right now, not mine, so I don't have the files to edit. --  Icy -chan  22:04, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job! Just blur the shading like Hiddensun said, and the rear leg farthest from us should be darker. Also, the eye looks kinda red. Great job though! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 22:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Let mek now if I need to darken the hind leg some more. How's this? --  Icy -chan  00:46, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Love it but i can't really see the ear pink. --Honeyrose34 14:59, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Looks amazing. Comments before approval? -- Tinsel claw  02:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Snowflake - For Approval
I feel like she needs fixing, but I dunno...does she? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 21:32, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I always think that the kits are sooo cute!! Maybe blur the shading more. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:57, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

and make the patches a litle more wavy. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:58, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I found two things. One, the eye color needs to show up better. I don't really see any. And two, the ear pink is too light. Fix those two things and you should be good! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Re-uploaded. 'Kay, I blurred the shading more, made the patches wavier, darkened the ear pink, and brightened up the eyes. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 22:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I can still barely see the ear pink; try making it a different color pink. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 23:32, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think that the ear pink is too big for the ear. Sorry if this ruins your chance of getting this approved soon!!-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Rosey, ear pink size differs from cat to cat, as well as some cats having brighter ear pink than others. Continuing comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Swiftstar (L)-For Approval
Is he okay? Warriors808 22:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't bad but you need to blur the shading and highlights. you might also want to add some shading to his left side.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:08, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Are you even online? Great for your first try! Just do what Ashy said and he'll be amazing! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:22, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Also, he needs ear pink --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The space right between his hind leg and his right fore-arm is white, it needs to be gray--Nightfall101 06:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his leg, it looks. . . smudged. And yes, add ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) - For Approval
Tortie spree! :D Constructments? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 00:17, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good. Maybe add some white because thats what her description says although it could always be wrong.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:28, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ OMG, I'm so stupid... I forgot to add white... >.<. Anyway, better now? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 01:44, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Only thing I got is add another shade of green to the eyes. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 12:52, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Great job!! But the white on the tail is bothering me. I really don't think it should be on her tail, but the rest of her is fine. It's just the tail. I kind-of seems unatural to me. Feel free to ignore my comment. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

I think the white on the tail is fine, there's probably more white on the other side of the tail that we can't see from this angle. Echomist, just do what Rainwhisker said about the eyes, and this should be good. Honeyrose, it's not that I'm ignoring your comment or contradicting it, it's just that there's probably more white on the tail from the angle that we can't see, as I said before. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:48, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) - For Approval
My second charart. Comments? --  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is incredible! Just two things, first of all I think I can see a gray speck on his belly. And then (This might just be me being picky) but the face looks a little to dark. Maybe lighten up on the shading there?--Nightfall101 20:59, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Holly!!! I agree with Night that the face is kinda too dark. And maybe blur a little the shading and the pink in the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

i love it! although, i agree also, the face is a bit too dark and shade the ear. Otherwise, its fantastic! -- ♥Shine star♥  23:31, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks =). Better now?  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is looking good. But there are two spots where the shading doesn't connect with the lineart. Right on his butt, (yeah, I said it =]) And the bottom of his front right paw.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:07, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Fallowtail (Q)-For Approval


My first one!! Hope I did okay...I didn't know what her eye color was, so I just put blue. I got rid Of Dovepaw, because Minnowclaw was going to do her, and she just didn't look good. Any comments? -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 21:53, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The color is good but I can tell that the lineart showed up with a black bg. When that happens to me I paste the image into a word document before pasting and saving it in paint. Why not try that, otherwise this is good for your first one.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:53, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I'll try that thanks!! I try it later cuz I have to get off... -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:05, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

As of my last check, I believe Minnowclaw is doing Dovepaw. Could you please resumbit this as another cat? It should be fairly easy; there are lots of gray cats. -- Tinsel claw  22:32, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

If you added gray flecks the cat could become Fernpaw, but we're not supposed to do other ranks for cats already with chararts, as Tinselclaw (or Bramble?) says. The lineart looks like it's been thinned, as in some areas there is no lineart at all. Try thickening it and see what happens. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 22:45, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

She looks pixely. Try redo-ing it and save it as a PNG image. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 02:12, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. -- :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! 21:55, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Thanx, Icy! I'll try! -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:00, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added Shading and Highlights on this one I think...I'm new at this and I don't have a mentor, so I quessed at what highlighting is...I think that Fallowtail looks mottled now..:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 23:12, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

She looks kinda pink to me. Maybe it's my computer.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:15, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay 1. Don't change the file name 2. Highlights you use the dodge tool at 5 or 7 (square not circle) And go over the chest,the front paw,the head,the muzzle, and the tip of her tail. Then change it to size 30 (faded circle) and put one on the hind leg and everywhere else just make sure their together. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:34, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again now I know how to shade and highlight. Thanx, Icy, buddy!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:15, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again and again Comment please...-- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

You use the burn tool to shade. Once you got that blur the shading and highlights into the pelt. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:41, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Shiningheart (W) - For Approval
I tried a Goldencloud style on this...and epicly failed. ;( Comments and suggestions needed! --  Icy -chan  02:22, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Woah! Swirly=) The stripes that are right above the hind leg, the ones that make a circle, look a little strange, and there's a little bit of blurred lineart below them. And it looks as if there are a few white pixels on her tail, right a long the lineart--Nightfall101 02:51, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, I'm just an apprentice so my opinion does not count as much as a warrior, but I agree with Nightfall, The stripes are sort of circley (is that a word?) so if it is a tabby or not, you may want to fix those (plus the line art has some little gaps) -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 20:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if this looks any better or not; personally, I think it looks worse. I was trying to make it look sort of like this, but I think I failed...I'll try a different type of tabby stripes and put it on the right, and get it up soon, and then everyone can help me decide which one to keep. I should get it up soon... (Oh yeah, I got my holiday sig. What do you all think of it?) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:17, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, both versions are up. Which one is better? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:41, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I like the second one better -- ♥Shine star♥  01:49, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the second one is much better. But the stripe on her head looks very thick. Maybe thin it out a little--Nightfall101 01:53, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I'll blur the stripe on her head tomorrow. For now, I must sleep. ;) Anyways, I've got just the second image up for approval now, I like it much better than the first as well. :) (Any more comments on the image, as well as comments on my new Christmas sig?) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:18, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Think I got it... -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:03, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, that's much better! I'd blur the shading on her chest though--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 04:09, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:49, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

That's much better. But I just noticed the shading on the back and tail should probably be blurred more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:29, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:16, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I think the stripes on her haunch should go down farther. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:10, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ...not sure what to think now, I think I got it... -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:15, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Briarpaw (A) - for approval


Ok, NOW this might be my best image I ever did. So comments. (And again, my apologies to Honeyrose for doing the same image as her). <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Oh Shoot! She already has a kit image! Bramble, do itake this down or can I can leave it up. If I can, I pormise I will only do cats without images. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:10, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

This can stay up, she already has a kit picture, she needs an apprentice picture. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:39, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

No worries, cats with their status updated in TFA are getting new images. For the image, this is very good. Lighten the ear pink, and this should be good. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:40, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, Sandwich. It's really no problem. I really do love this though. I can't see anything at the moment, so keep the good work going!! -- "'Rosey'" "'Happy Leaf-bare!'"

Reuploaded. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 02:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Tinsel claw  02:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Nightwing (W)-For Approval
My second Charart! Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job!!! Maybe blur the ear more and either make the shading darker or the pelt lighter. Hidden -jimgle ♪  00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

It's AWESOME Icy, but blur the ear pink a little and maybe a couple shades lighter. Otherwise, It lookes great!!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:07, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be a bit smaller. It takes up the whole ear. Great job, my apprentice! :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:11, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Um I am trying to full it up to a lighter black but it fills the line-art to! Help! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:14, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still think the earpink is still too big. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

If you use pixlr.com you can either use burn tool to make darker or doge too to make lighter parts. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:06, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

And to blur the ear pink. It's too bright, run the burn tool over it a bit.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 20:16, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! But try making the ear pink more of a purplish-color. Like Fuzzypelt And maybe make it's postion a little higher--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Workin on it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:48, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is she ready for approval? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:08, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. I think she'll be ready after that-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred earpink. Better? Is she resady for approval? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:15, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Stop asking. It will be approved when it's ready. Add some shading on the top of the head and more on the chest. There is a dark patch on the haunch among the shading; get rid of that. also blur the shading as much as you possibly can. -- Tinsel claw  01:54, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I am sooooooooooooooooo sorry. And how do I get rid of it? (Please don't laugh) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 03:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ivypaw- For Approval
I don't know about this one...-- Darkhallows 11:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The gray patches seem smudged. Could you fix that please? -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Darken earpink.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:46, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Minnowtail(w)-for approval
The book said she was a dark gray she-cat...but I'm working on the dark gray and white one now and I'll upload it soon... so any comments,criticism?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 17:36, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Really nice!!! Maybe blur teh ear a little more. Hidden -jimgle ♪  17:38, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like some of the lineart of the eye is missing. Just fix that, as well as what Hiddensun said, and this should be good. Great job! -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:52, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 21:19, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be my opinion, but I don't think we need the grey and white version. She has only been mentioned as grey in her warrior rank. If we later see her as grey and white in following books then we'll need an alternate version, but as it stands now, I don't think we do. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Are her eyes blue or amber? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC) ]

I'd guess probably amber...REUPOADed-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 18:45, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:24, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Night of No Stars (CG) For Approval
Okay, here she is again. And it's okay Icethroat, I understand--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:08, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. *sighs in relief* Okay, for the image: maybe run the dodge tool over the ear pink a couple of times, and the mud streaks, make them a darker brown, and thicken the streak on the head just a little bit. Otherwise, awesome, and thanks again. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:13, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I darkened the mud streaks, lightened the ear pink, and thickened the mud streak on her head. Better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:32, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Now the ear pink is too light. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - The mud streaks look awesome! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:16, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I ran the burn tool over the ear pink some. Better? And thanks Mossy!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Nettlepaw (a) For approval


My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Echosong - For Approval
I'm working on getting all SkyClan cats available done. How is Echosong? -- Tinsel claw  01:50, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

It's a nice picture, but I've never liked that style of tabby stripes. I'm not saying you have to change them, I'm just saying that's my opinion. Other than that, there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with it. The shading and highlights are very nice--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:02, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Wonderful job on Echosong!Good job on shading and highlights.I like her tabby stripes --Firepelt 02:15, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Thanks Fire. Sorry about the stripes, Nightfall; they're the way I've always done them, and I can't change my style now. -- Tinsel claw  02:17, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I know, I really wasn't trying to critisize it. Just my opinion=) But yes, her shading and highlights are awsome! But I would darken her eye color just a little bit--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:20, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Done. -- Tinsel claw  02:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Looks awsome. And I love the rudolph cat!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Wonderful job, Bramble. I don't see anything else. . . but I'm just an apprentice (who isn't on the template). It looks amazing!-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:35, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 06:46, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

For some odd reason I see a light blue background. Is it just me or the computer? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

It's transparent, I assure you. -- Tinsel claw  19:02, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA) -- for Approval
It may not be nessacary, but I made an image of Hollyleaf as a medicine cat apprentice. It is my first and I'd like to learn as much as possible. Maplefern 13:50, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I'd say to blur the highlights around the edges, fill in that white spot on her belly, add ear pink, and to do the eye according to this tutorial. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 15:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Maplefern 15:47, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I can just see a few things: The Lineart on the chest seems to be blurred and the shadding isn't blurred enough (and needs to be lighter) ;). Something happened to the lineart on the hindleg too, I think. Otherwise it looks great for you first Charart =). --  Holly... leaf or berry?

Reuploaded Maplefern 16:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Your ear pink is round and more closer to the begining of her ear (tip). And make it a lighter color. It's too bright right now. Nice job for your 1st!! And by the way, on your title, you don't need to menton it's your 1st. Just say the cat, what position it's in, and that it's up for approval. I fixed it for u. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded Is it better? Maplefern 16:21, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, like her kit version. Add some shading to the tail, and make all of the shading just a little bit darker. But this image isn't really necessary right now, as it says up at the top in the purple box that says "important". Can you find any other cat this could be? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) - For Approval
Can owls even have whiskers? The Erins should have shuck with Owlfeather if you ask me... Constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright and I think (in opinon) that the tabby marks are too closse together. Feel free to ignore the marking part of the comment. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - Whisker? Really? I actually like the tabby stripes the way they are now. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:19, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Heatherstar - For Approval
A pinkish-gray cat? Does that color even exist in cats? Anyway, I know this is the 36th image, but there are alot already in the 24 hours stage, so it won't be the 36th for long. And I think I made her a little too pinkish. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 16:18, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think it really does! xD Anyway, yeah make the pink a little bit more grey and pale. She looks good, other than that. Also, you may want to lighten the shading just a tad. ;) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 16:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with mumble,You need to tone down on the shding,A tad bit,and make the pink colored fur a little more grey,but not to gray.Other than that,good job on her.--Firepelt 17:43, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Reuploaded - Lightened the shading, fixed the ear pink, and made her slightly more grayish. Better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 18:13, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Yup.Good job!--Firepelt 18:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Berrynose(kit)-For approval
This is Berrynose as a kit before he got his tail severly damanged and removed.Sandy tutorial on shading helped me big time.Critisim?Advice?Help?Comments?--Firepelt 17:20, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

He's really good Fire!!! Maybe make the shading thicker and blur teh pink in the ear more. Hidden -jimgle ♪  17:31, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedAlright!Thx!I'll try to make the shading darker,But i have a REALLY hard time with the ear pink.Can you tell me how to fix it,since im still an apprentice?--Firepelt 17:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

well maybe make the ear a moree peachy pin(if you know what I mean) and then blur it a lot on the outside. And I'm apprentice too. Hidden -jimgle ♪  17:43, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

or just blur it using the bluring tool at size five and blur teh whole pink in the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  17:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedHow's the ear pink color and look now?Is it ok?--Firepelt 17:47, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

maybe make it a little darker but its better!! Hidden -jimgle ♪  17:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploadeddarken ear pink-Check

Darken shading and blur-Check Anything else?--Firepelt 17:54, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

I don't see anything else. It's really good!! Hidden -jimgle ♪  17:58, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you!I'm waiting for some warriors and senior warriors to comment it.(Hopefully)--Firepelt 18:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

The shading needs to be blurred and some needs to be put between the front legs. Inside the lineart, there is an edge where teh shading didn't hit, and it's a regular pelt color. Put a thin ring of shading underneath the mouth, where teh chin should be. -- Tinsel claw  19:33, December 6, 2009 (UTC)