Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Furzepelt - Silver Nomination
I added quotes, which was pretty much all she needed. 01:55, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly detail The Sign of the Moon just a bit more? 20:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:01, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Expand TFW? 17:25 Mon Jan 16

This is the best I can do. She's not in it much. 02:33, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good to me.

CBV? 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:54, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbittail - Silver Nomination
I added some quotes. I think they describe him pretty well. Comments? 04:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Should you describe that in WindClan, they had picked out warriors to travel down in the tunnels in the beginning? 04:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I will, but, where would I add that? 04:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I added it into the quotes section. If it should be moved just tell me. 06:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Rephrase the third paragraph please. 17:25, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Done. ^.^ 06:01, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:54, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) - Silver Nomination
I've always loved her too! Comments? 18:33 Tue Jan 3

Can you detail Night Whispers a tad bit more? 21:07, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you work on The Sight? Just some rewording, and explain why Ivytail got first pick off the fresh-kill pile during the Daylight Gathering. 21:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you expand Outcast and Dark River? 21:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Done with The Sight and Night Whispers. I'll get on with Dark River and Outcast. 21:37 Thu Jan 5

Epico. 22:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, and all done. 18:15 Fri Jan 6

Any quotes? Very well done Sweet! 00:51, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Imma derp xD I'll get quotes in now. 17:09 Sat Jan 7

Besides quotes, could you please detail Long Shadows any more, if possible? 17:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can't, sorry. :/ I'm working on getting quotes. 21:46 Mon Jan 9

Quotes are in. 01:31 Wed Jan 11

Maybe detail overall history. 01:19, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Done, it's hard to detail a minor charachter... 21:52 Thu Jan 12

CBV? 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:54, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Percy - Silver Nomination
Needs work, yes. Comments? 21:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. The history needs expanding majorly, and the quotes need to show more of his personality. 21:49, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Changed the main quote, rewrote the history, and worked on the quotes. 22:42, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

All in all, though it may be a short article, it is very well-written. Possibly expand the history slightly? Just Dance  Gonna be okay...

Thank you, Soleil. ^_^ Did some minor expanding, but I'll probably do more later on. 18:29, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 06:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:54, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Nettleclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I added the only quote relating to him, and expanded his history as much as possible. Comments? 00:16, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the quote the main quote. 00:44, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Maybe detail his history a bit more. Looks good.^^ -- 19:01, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he's only seen in 1 sentence, so thats as good as I can do. And, the quote is better as a dialogue quote...so it can't be the main quote. 00:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes that could be added? I don't have the book, so I'm not sure. =P 03:07, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, none. 23:53, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The page looks good to me.

Ebonyclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I made a Beyond the Code section for her, and overall it looks good to me. Quotes will be added soon. 02:20, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Well done. My only suggestion would be to find a main quote that describes her a little more. 15:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I added a link for the nomnom... 00:40 Thu Jan 12

Yeah, find the quotes, and also, can you expand her history a bit more? -- 01:18, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Adding more quotes, and I expanded The Rescue since SkyClan's Destiny seems to be fine, and in Beyond the Code, she was only mentioned/seen a couple times. 18:27, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I'm going to have to withdraw her.. I am going to work on her article a bit more, then nominate her. 13:57, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Like I said on another nomination, this is PC, not PCA. It's still a silver nomination whether withdrawn or in process. However, I do admire your decision to nominate it later once you've fixed such and such. 03:37, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart - Silver Nomination
I added 2 quotes as well as adding a description and rewrote the second paragraph of BP. Comments? 22:24, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If you can, break up the paragraphs of the history in CP, expecially the first one. Other then that, this looks great! 05:12, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Done. 00:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a while since I've read BP, and I'm curious. Does Shellheart appear anywhere else aside from the little battle at Sunningrocks? If so, please elaborate. If not, this is an article that's very detailed, despite him only being in two books. 06:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I searched his name in BP on my kindle and found nothing, but, I'll look again. 00:44, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I searched the browse inside if anyone still cares, and he's only in the allegiances and pages 297, 298, 300, and 302 o3o 03:43, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just curious, are there any more quotes? 17:13, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I added two more. 21:01, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

His page looks splendid to me.

Flower (Lo) - Silver Nomination
Expanded as much as possible, I added the only quote about her, so comments? 01:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you mention how Flower came to join Sol earlier in the history? Otherwise this looks really nice. 02:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Done -ish, it 'twas always the first sentence. x3 01:24, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Pepper - Silver Nomination
Comments on issues other than quotes? =3 05:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Quotes are added. =3 02:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you find just one more quote, other than that, well done! 01:16, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the only quote that might've worked is stating that he's dead and honestly, I'd rather have two substantial quotes then have three quotes with one extremely poor one. x3. Anyways, thanks! 01:22, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Expand or detail his article in any way, shape or form? xD 21:53 Mon Jan 16

Nope, only what? Like 8 words about him? x3 01:40, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Woo! 8 words! Good 'nuff x3 01:47 Tue Jan 17

Possible to expand second paragraph?

Smoky - Silver Nomination
I'm determined. I rewrote a lot of the history (haven't worked that much on TFW, but there isn't much to do there), but I still have more to do with it. I just needed something more to work with. Yes, I'm about to deal with the quotes. Oh, and I don't want to hear anything about Sign of the Moon and why it doesn't have a section, because he wasn't listed in the allegiances for whatever reason. xP All right, then, comments? 19:58, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Seriosuly, he's perfect in my opinion! 23:33 Sat Jan 14

I agree, its great, but the main quote, in my opinion, doesn't show a lot of his personality, can you change it? 01:22, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, guys. Still not too confident about the main quote; I typed the rest of it in. The alternatives I had in mind are the first two in the quotes section. Of course, only the third part of the second one. 22:11, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. 21:42 Sun Jan 29

Morningmist ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? I've expanded as much as possible. 23:50, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes? <span style="">00:23 Sat Jan 14

None, thats all. 23:18, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Willowstar ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? I added a quote and expanded. 00:50, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Anymore quotes? <span style="">00:26 Sat Jan 14

Nope, thats all she ever says. 23:15, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Patchfoot - Silver Nomination
I looked it over and it looks pretty good. It only needs an opening quote. I am looking through Firestar's Quest and I'm debating over, like four quotes to use. However if you figure one out, you are welcome to do so. 23:09, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I gave him bronze status. Just lettin' you know. Add some quotes if you can, and expand ''Firestar's Quest. <span style="">23:14 Sat Jan 14 ''

Is it possible at all to detail Beyond the Code? 23:19, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll look over. I haven't read Beyond the Code yet so I'd like some help with that. -- 23:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I can help, if you want. 23:55, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If possible, expand SkyClan's Destiny. And if there are like 3 quotes you don't use that are still good, then just make a quote section and add it in (but I assume you already knew that). :)

Did you get the stuff in there Quailflight? <span style="">21:07 Sat Jan 21

I wrote down so many notes....but I misplaced them....but I'll find them. I would need some help expanding SkyClan's Destiny though. 10:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Robinstar ~ Silver Nomination
There are no quotes I can use, but if it needs expanding or re-wording I'm all up to it! Comment? <span style="">23:46 Wed Jan 18

Make the quote the main quote? ;/ <span style="">00:35, Thu, Jan, 19, 2012

I don't think your supposed to use dialouge quotes for a main quote. <span style="">00:38 Thu Jan 19

Actually, a lot of cats have dialogue main quotes, so I think it would be fine. 13:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I'll add it in. <span style="">22:21 Thu Jan 19

Can you expand the last couple of sentences? Thanks.

Sure. <span style="">20:15 Sat Jan 28

I kind of meant just make the last sentence clearer. Thanks.

Looks good to me.

Thanks, done. <span style="">20:41 Sat Jan 28

Otterheart ~ Silver Nomination
Tehe. Comments? :P <span style="">01:00 Thu Jan 19

Withdrawing to pursue a different article :3 <span style="">22:22 Thu Jan 19

May I take this on? 03:04, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it bro! <span style="">00:56 Sat Jan 21

Guys, keep in mind that this is not PCA. Whether a nomination is withdrawn or declined doesn't change the fact that it's a silver nomination. In any case, it needs quotes and a bit of expanding. 01:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry. :/ <span style="">18:04 Sat Jan 21

...I just realized that I wouldn't be a help on this article. I don't have TFA, so I can't find quotes, and I can't expand it. Withdrawing. 00:25, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mosspelt ~ Silver Nomination
Woo! I got Mosspelt! :P Comments? <span style="">22:23 Thu Jan 19

Possibly re-word Rising Storm. 02:34, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Done. <span style="">02:40 Sat Jan 21

Any references? I don't see very many tags. If you don't have those books, then that's understandable. Just a suggestion. 21:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Er, what do ya want me to cite? <span style="">01:15 Fri Jan 27

Can you expand Twilight at all? 07:02, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Or reword it? *hit "publish" a bit too fast x3* 07:03, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Done! <span style="">18:41 Sun Jan 29

Grasskit (CP) ~ Silver Nomination
The article looks good. I could expand her bio though, I guess. Comments? 02:47, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I expanded her bio some more, comments? 03:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

You mean history? :3 Add quotes if you can, even if their narrations. <span style="">21:18 Sat Jan 21

Yes, history. xD I added a main quote. It was the only quote I could find that had anything to do with Grasskit. xD 22:47, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe expand first paragraph? Other than there being no main quote it looks good to me.

Shorty - Silver Nomination
I've been visiting his page as much as I can and I completely expanded his entire life in SkyClan's Destiny. I also added three quotes, and the main one was already there. The page is as beefed up as it can be, so i think it deserves it. ^^

Well done with the history. Is there a main quote that describes him more? If not, don't worry. 14:03, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Nice one Thistleshine! Can you find better quotes that describe his personality more in the quote section? (Oh, and by the way, you can put nominations at the end of the page, they don't have to be after one another :) <span style="">15:41 Sun Jan 29

Join Request ~ Willowfern
Hi. Can I join...? ;.; Willowfern 03:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Of course, please take a look at the guidelines and if you have any questions, check out the FAQ. Welcome to the project. 06:37, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Welcome to the project! <span style="">01:00 Fri Jan 27

Welcome Willowfern! <span style="">01:17, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Burr
In the Warriors Adventure Game setting The Plaintive Howls, there is a rogue named Burr. I think this cat should get it's individual page. He should be considered a character, but because how he appears....I don't know if we should add him. Comments? 11:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it counts. If characters from The Warriors App count, this should too. 23:33, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Agreeable, but does he have a description?

Nevermind. That is PCA's job. But if other characters from the app have characters, so should he.

Leaving
To all members of this project: I'm sorry, but I'm leaving the wiki. I know, by leaving, I'm being an irresponsible deputy, but the truth is, I already am. I know I haven't been as active as I used to be, and should be, but I do have a life, and its getting busier and busier. Through all my 1.5 years on this wiki, this project has always been one of my top 2 favorites, and its really hard to think that I'll never be able to nominate anything again, but who knows? Maybe once my life gets less busy, I'll rejoin. But, for now, I think this project needs a more active member to serve as deputy. I'm sorry for leaving, but this wiki is just too stressful for me. I'm sure that, with all PC's supporters and experienced members, this project will be just the same, or even better without me. Again, I'm so sorry for letting you all down, but I just don't have enough time for the wiki. 23:32, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

You haven't and are not an irresponsible deputy. You've been an inspiration to all users and have achieved so much. You are an amazing deputy and it's sad to think that we're losing you. Good luck in life, take as many opportunities as possible, and come back soon! :) 23:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Misty you were the best deputy ever! Thanks for helping me when I first joined! May StarClan light your path. 23:40, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Misty, you haven't been an irresponsible deputy. You did the best you could, if not, better. You'll be an important user that I wish this project wouldn't lose. We all have our own lives outside the wiki, which is understandable. I can't wait for you to return if you ever do, I'd be really glad to see you. Best wishes, and good luck in life, <span style="">23:52 Thu Jan 26

You all know very well that I haven't been nearly as contributive recently as I should have. It is my regrets to leave, but I think its for the good of the wiki and myself. I'll miss you guys. :( 00:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

We'll miss you too D: <span style="">00:57 Fri Jan 27

Bye Misty. You were a great inspiration for me, basically my PC idol. We'll miss you and we appreciate your work you have done for us so far. From me I give you my best of wishes for you. <span style="">01:28, Fri, Jan, 27, 2012

I know I haven't been here long, but I'll still miss you. Don't be so hard on yourself, you've been a great deputy, and we'll always be grateful for the work you've done for PC. I wish you the best of luck in life. 03:13, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar, I may have never known you that well, but I do know about your dedication and hard work. You were an amazing deputy of this project, leader of PW, and SW of PCA. That's something to proud of. No way are you irresponsible. Good luck, and I wish you the best in life. 14:21, January 27, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Leaving x 2
That's right, I'm quitting as well. I can't stand it. I couldn't stand making the decision. Ths wiki is family. I'm tearing apart all the bonds painfully... But I can't do it anymore. Life's stressful. I have to do something with my life. I know I haven't started high school yet, but I'm ambitious. I want to grow up and be something useful, like a doctor or a lawyer. And to do that, I can't do this wiki. I'm literally crying as I type this, this decision is so hard! But I'm afraid I'll have to carry through. Maybe I'll come back, but not too soon. I'll pop in once in a while on not-so-busy days. I used to love this Project, and I hope it continues strong. Thank you all, for the wondrous times I've had here. I know I'm being selfish, but I hope you understand. Thanks again, and I wish this wiki, the best of luck to succeed for the future. 03:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

We'll miss you just as much, SquirrelFlame. You've been a great WWikian, and all your work will be appreciated. I wish you the best in life, and that you do enter the career of your choice. And if you ever do get a chance to come back, we'd be happy if you did. :) 15:44, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

What!? No! Squirrel :(. I'll miss yu so much! Yuo did so much for me on PW and I'll never froget that. I wish you well in life <span style="">16:42 Fri Jan 27

Understandable. Hope to see you when you come on (even though you don't know me :) ).

Bye Squirrel. :( it must be a hard decision. Maybe in the future (20 years or so) we might see you become one of the best helpful person in the world (what ever job you get). You won't regret your decision and we will be so pround of you :). I look forward to seeing you come on wiki some time soon! <span style="">00:54, Sat, Jan, 28, 2012

Join Request
Hi can i join-- 19:47, January 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Sure! Atelda or Moonflight will come by and add ya in! <span style="">22:56 Fri Jan 27

Please read the guidelines and if you have any questions, take a look at the FAQ. Welcome to the project. 23:57, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Welcome to PC Moonshine. <span style="">01:14, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Onestar-Silver Nomination (again)
Comments?

Expand Firestar's Quest, Dawn, Fire and Ice, Forest of Secrets, The Darkest Hour, Eclipse, The Forgotten Warrior and The Fourth Apprentice. <span style="">23:44 Sun Jan 29

Dewstar(leaf)~join request
Hi, it's me, Dewstar(leaf) and I would like to join the project:Characters. Just saying, I think the users who are part of this project should write down when Jaypaw goes to ShadowClan. -- 00:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Sit tight! Atelda or Moonflight will drop by and add ya in! <span style="">01:13 Mon Jan 30

'kay, thanks! -- 01:14, January 30, 2012 (UTC)