Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 144

Snipe (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to have a shorter tail, ripped ears, and make the darker grey black. OA was Ivystripe with a tweak by SnowedLightning. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 02:33, April 20, 2018 (UTC)

Hmm...could you possibly define the shading, particularly on the legs? 02:01, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

the tail was meant to be longer, not shorter. it's not that short in the manga. the ears also aren't quite that shredded. 02:21, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

I know this is not what it was tweaked for, but there is leaking shading on the stomach that is quite noticeable.

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:03, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 01:04, April 26, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 02:29, April 27, 2018 (UTC)

Hawkwing (K) ~ Tweaked
tweaked for fixing my old tabby tweak; i'd made a mistake in the layer order which hid some shading, and also the white texture the other images have, but this one didn't

Can you define the shading a bit and define the ear pink in --> ear. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 22:11, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

24 hours. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 02:29, April 27, 2018 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt. Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to define the shading. OA was Paleclaw with tweaks by A Beautiful Oblivion and Jayce. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 01:12, April 26, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 02:29, April 27, 2018 (UTC)

Petalnose (alt w) - Tweaked
OA is *Wildfire*, and it looks like Mistypebble did a tweak. Tweaked to define light. 13:33, April 28, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 20:37, April 30, 2018 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt W) ~ Tweaked
oh goodness. <span style="">13:11, 5/01/2018

Define the shading on the tail and the lighting on the front legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:16, May 1, 2018 (UTC)


 * I mean define the lighting also on the tail. It looks like the tail is darker at the base then just light on the top. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:17, May 1, 2018 (UTC)

Remove the shading on the back/neck because the light's hitting < way (it looks like, anyways) and so there wouldn't be any there. Maybe extend the facial shading as well to further up

As I overlooked the file I realized the lighting is coming from at least --> direction, so I made an attempt with the shading stuff. Fixed. <span style="">13:31, 5/01/2018

I still think the light source is still hard to see. Especially on the face and legs. Also, maybe fix the lighting/shading on the tail. It looks like light on the tip and darker on the bottom. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 02:31, May 3, 2018 (UTC)

I don't know what to do about the head shading, and yes, the tail shading is meant to look like that. It's the original source. <span style="">02:34, 5/03/2018

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 01:02, May 4, 2018 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mintstarr and a tweak by Rowanflight. Tweaked to resolve light issues. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 02:36, May 3, 2018 (UTC)

I think you were supposed to tweak the version of the image from May 9, 2017

I did tweak that. The shading needed to fixed to with the light issues. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:33, May 3, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 01:02, May 4, 2018 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. W2) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mintstarr. Tweaked to resolve light issues. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 02:36, May 3, 2018 (UTC)

Same as above ^^

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 01:02, May 4, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Alt K) ~ Tweaked
If I'm correct, the recent OA is DJAngelCandy. Tweaked to define the shading. <span style="">17:52, 5/07/2018

Can you define it on the tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 18:49, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Fixed. <span style="">18:53, 5/07/2018

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 16:05, May 8, 2018 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Lo) ~ Redone
The ginger may look dark from the shading, but it's the color from the kittypet. OA was Spooky. Redone to match other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 04:19, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on the paws real quick? Having a bit of trouble telling they're white

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 04:09, May 8, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 00:11, May 9, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Star) ~ Redone
Redone to match rogue and not have the stripes and shading clash each other. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 04:53, May 8, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 00:11, May 9, 2018 (UTC)

Twigbranch (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to darken to match Hawkwing. Comments? 16:09, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading a tad? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 18:49, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:00, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

I think there's shading linking on the belly. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 04:10, May 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:07, May 8, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 02:05, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

Twigbranch (A) ~ Tweaked
Same as above. Comments? 16:09, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define the lighting on the tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 18:50, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:00, May 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading/lighting. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 04:09, May 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:07, May 8, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. 02:05, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

Twigbranch (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Oa was me, tweaked to darken to match Hawkwing. Comments? 02:27, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 02:36, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (App) ~ Redone
This is ugly. Redone to match rogue. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 03:40, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

Idk if it's the shading tint, but this seems overall a warmer shade than the rogue. <span style="">21:40 Thu May 10

It's the shading tint. I color picked it from the rogue and star. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 22:21, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 02:36, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Dustpelt (W Alt) - Tweaked
OAs were Ashshadow and Jayce. Tweaked to fixed the shading. <span style="">21:54 Thu May 10

smooth the shading out a bit

Reuploaded Also lightened it, so hopefully that helped <span style="">22:25 Thu May 10

Define the lighting on the legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 22:31, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed out a little more on the neck as well^^

Reuploaded I tried with the neck shading >< <span style="">22:50 Thu May 10

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 14:32, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Weaselfur (A) ~ Tweaked
tweaked to reduce white. also is it just me or is there just a strip of shading across the middle? <23:20, 5/10/2018> ​ <23:20, 5/10/2018> ​

Add some shading to <-- ear. And I think it's the shading style. It's like that on some apprentices. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 23:40, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

pretty sure there doesn't have to be shading in that ear. 06:51, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

24 hours. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 14:32, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt L) - Redone
yay, he doesn't look like plastic. Also, please don't make me change him to be actually red; fox-red is ginger.

I love the coloring! Define the shading on the chest? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 17:43, May 10, 2018 (UTC)


 * Or maybe define the shading overall. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 21:40, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tinkered with a few things.

24 hours.