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Grasspaw (A) ~ CBA
Another pale brown tabby. :3 Added a thin texture.

Add some light to the far back paw, and possibly the back? I think there would probably be some light there with your source. (If you don't use highlights, ignore me.)) ~ Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:24, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Added some highlights on the paw and a bit on the end of her back.

Can you define the ear pink on > side just a bit? 19:54, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make her look a bit less green-ish. Tinting your shading brown/red might work. Also, for pale brown cats, I tend to use #9c6442 as a nice pale brown shade, but that's totally up to you if you want to do that. 01:58, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Defined the ear pink by removing a little bit of the shading, and made the shading brownish. :3

Earpink still needs to be define in the ---> ear. Looking good:) 13:56, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Try shifting your earpink layer around a bit... 7:49 PM, Thu Sep 4, 2014

Re-up ~ Defined the ear pink a bit again. :3 Sorry for being late, school is starting again and I'm busy with my own wiki. And what do you mean with shifting the earpink layer around?

It still looks a tad green...perhaps try making the base coat more reddish, or use the hex code I gave above for it?? if you chose to use the hex code, then you should also set the stripe layer to multiply as well. I think that'd do the trick o3o 22:01, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

I mean moving the ear pink layer over/under some layers of shading if it's on its own layer. 1:41 PM, Sun Sep 7, 2014

The earpink is fine as-is. I can see it clearly, and not everyone has shading on the earpink. 22:18 Tue Sep 9

Is this still being worked on?

Re-up ~ Made the fur color a little more reddish. Hope it's better now. c:

Define the light on the feets a tad more and I think this'll be ready. 15:50, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Did it. :3

CBA? 17:35, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Spikepaw (A) ~ CBA
I'm on a roll. First time I've been happy with texture. Comments? 21:15, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink a bit more. 04:00, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:08, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on all four paws. Looks pretty! 01:27, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Is that supposed to be texture? I can't tell, and it fades into the shading. Could you define that a lot?

Reuploaded. 01:40, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Try smudging the texture more - it looks like it's markings/stripes on the body. 18:34, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:43, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see it at all on the tail now. Define that? Also, the texture should flow with the direction of the fur, so on the haunch, it should go down the leg toward the foot. If that makes any sense. If you need a demo, message me, and I can teach you. 18:57, 09/6/2014

Is this still being worked on?

Reuploaded. I removed the texture. I'm going get more practice on it before I put it on an official image. 21:28, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. It also appears to creep away from the lineart in various places around the image, like the haunch.

Reuploaded. 23:43, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

I think this is perfect, so CBA? 0:53 Tue Sep 16

Featherpaw (A) - For Approval
I did my best. Tigerbird-The-Great 01:03, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Can you darken/define the shading? And tone the earpink down some, it looks a little bright. You can just run the burn tool over it a few times, and that should do the trick. I like those eyes. 1:13 Fri Sep 5

Smear a bit of the fur into the ears 18:02, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Tigerbird-The-Great 01:19, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge some more fur into the ears. Still looks a bit solid. 04:31, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Oh and define the light on all four paws^^ 19:45, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten she shading just a tick? The stripes are getting a little lost. Nice job! 9:00 PM, Sat Sep 6, 2014

This is beautiful! I feel so proud right now Define the light on the lower part of the tail, and possibly the shading on the tailtip? 11:39, September 7, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? 15:48, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

I will update soon. Tigerbird-The-Great 23:47, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I cannot smudge any fur into the ears. I need opinions. Tigerbird-The-Great 00:51, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Add more stripes. 11:27, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tigerbird-The-Great 21:07, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Is it possible to make the pattern look more natural? If you look at other tabby chararts or a real life tabby, that'd be a good reference. 08:52, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Toadstep (SC) - For Approval
-gross sobbing- My poor baby! Also, I will fix the waste in the next reupload. 19:06, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the ear a bit more and define the shading a bit 19:08, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Try blurring/smudgning the earpink a bit more. The white on the right paw is higher than on the left paw, and the chest white could do with a bit more blurring plus a bit of defining on the shading. Also, the file should be named Toadstep.star.png. Brick 20:02, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on >>>> paw a bit, too. 20:09, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shoulder should be black, not white. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:24, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a little? Everywhere except for the haunch and face. 17:43, 09/6/2014 Try making his eyes a bit more pale.

Define the overall shading while your at it.-- 18:52, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Can you blur the white on his chest? It looks a bit hard edged. Poor Toadstep. Tigerbird-The-Great 23:40, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not changing the design on his paws, because it matches his other chararts,and his design is based off of my real cat, so uneven socks on the paws is realistic. 17:40, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste around the image.

Perhaps just make the eyes a tad bit more of a paler green to match his other images, and also either blur or smudge (Whatever they used on his other images) the white parts just a tad. -- 00:57, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay! And since I use Sai and it has a really unreliable selection tool, I'm having a hard time removing waste without it removing lineart. Does anyone else use Sai and have a "true" way of selecting the binary region instead of it being feathered? I feel like a dumb and I'm sorry 16:02, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

If I were to make a reccomendation on removing waste on SAI, it would be select outside on the lineart layer on default settings, using working layer only settings, and going through each layer doing CTRL+X. That should work. Brick  20:48, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (Star) ~ For Approval
Another StarClanner :3 SziriXxX (talk) 14:41, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. This is good c: 15:16, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes on his back a bit.--crow!!!! 15:18, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes don't need to be smudged. They have to match his other images, Crow.

Re-ups Thanks Breezy c: SziriXxX (talk) 17:56, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Extend the shoulder highlight farther up and add some shading on the bottom of the chest. 15:54 Tue Sep 9 2014

Re-upsSziriXxX (talk) 19:10, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad. 17:01, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 15:57, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. 11:28, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 17:15, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit - very handsome. 17:36, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:41, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Alt A) ~ CBA
She was described as tortoiseshell-and-white in the allegiances of BS, so she gets this, right? 21:07 Mon Sep 8

Can you brighten up the white just a little bit?

Lighten the tail shading a bit, define the earpink some more, and mind defining the ginger flecks a tad more? They seem pale and not too noticible. This looks nice. 17:04, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. 20:44 Wed Sep 10

Brighten the belly white just a bit and this'll be perfect. 15:44, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

I'm scared that if I do that the shading will look flat... 22:53 Thu Sep 11

I don't think it would, Hawky, go ahead and do that ^_^ The image is beautiful. 19:37, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 0:59 Mon Sep 15

Perfection. CBA? 17:34, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Foxleap (Star) - For Approval
I haven't done this in ages. <span style="">5:42 Tue Sep 9 2014

Because its not loading here. <span style="">5:47 Tue Sep 9 2014

This is beautiful O_O. Define the tail shading a tad? 08:56 10 Sep 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="">14:53 Wed Sep 10 2014

Define the shading on the arm closest to us a bit; he's very handsome I liked him why did he have to die? :/ 15:46, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="">15:55 Mon Sep 15 2014

Petalfur (Q) - For Approval
Comments? 18:12, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading 19:48, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Personally I think it's fine. It's rather clear, and defining it any more will make it look too dark. 20:04, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and thicken it a bit around the belly and define it on the face and on her lifted forleg. I think there's also some waste on her back 03:24, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading, and I agree with Shinx- I think it could use some definition.

Smudge the earpink into the fur or vice versa. and if you have no clue what vice versa means don't sweat it. It is Latin--I think--literally meaning other way around. It currently looks too neat for a long furred cat. Keep it up! 17:21, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudging the ear pink is not required on these blanks. I don't smudge them on mine, and I know a couple others that don't either. Plus, it already looks like Feather smudged it- it's just not extravagant.

Re-uploaded. 17:52, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

She's looking a teensy bit cross eyed. Well done! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:15, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the belly and add depth all around. Define the light on the lifted forepaw 04:42, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. 08:02, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Whitewing (Queen) - CBA
hi changes are here

It might just be my phone, but her eyes look blue in this picture, and they should be green. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:02, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Wrong layer was showing, oops.

Gotcha. ^^ Give the eyes more depth, and darken the shading a tiny bit. It looks good. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:19, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the front legs a tiny bit - she's beaauttiful 16:06, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading more on the face: like put some shading where her eyes are to define the mouth and nose. And the tail: make the shading curve more to the shape of the tail. Very pretty!! 17:29, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did not add any shading where her eyes are, since that kind of depth and things of that nature isn't something we have to do. It's optional and I opt not to do it. It's not part of the basic shading- it's there to give some extra shape to the image and people have just been doing it more frequently. I did extend the bottom facial shading a bit, though. Also, the tail shading does curve, but the highlight kinda goofed it up lol.

Can you fix that then? Not only does it not look like it's following the curve of the tail, but it looks like it could possibly need a bit more smudging. Not sure if it's the highlight doing that though. <span style="">21:14, 09/10/2014

Re-uploaded. I had tried to on the previous upload, but I think my layers got mixed up. I just redid the shading.

can you define the shading on the back leg closest to us? 07:01, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the tail shading 22:11, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the lifted front paw, and possibly the far back leg? 08:01, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the overall shading a tad and then I'll CBA it. <span style="">0:55 Tue Sep 16

Re-uploaded. Darkened it instead of defined it, since I don't know if defining it would have done the trick and you told me you couldn't see it. Changes are here if Wikia isn't working. Still dunno if it's dark enough, and I think PS is malfunctioning on me again. x.x

CBA, as promised? <span style="">1:10 Tue Sep 16

Duskfur (Q) ~ For Approval
Changes are here; I have a valid reason for the smudged shading being bad, it's my first ever smudged shading. Comments? 15:50, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit more and brighten the yellow in ---> this eye to match the other. Define the eye depth a bit while you're at it. This is very pretty Sorrel!! is it hard? I'm gonna try smudged shading on my next image. 17:33, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the pale parts on her tail and belly, and her warrior has them.

Reups I can't really define the pale of the tail much more because of that pesky tail smudged shading. I can attempt to, though - changes be here 15:41, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see any shading, did you hide one of your layers by mistake? <span style="">8:40 PM, Thu Sep 11, 2014

It is there, I've probably got the opacity too low. I'll define the shading in a bit. 20:56, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reups there we go, changes should be up soon 21:17, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

It could just be my phone, but I can't really see must shading on her tail. Could you define it a bit? she looks so beautiful <span style="">01:21 Sat Sep 13

Reups that tail is extremely annoying; if I try defining the shading, the pale part starts vanishing. thank you Berry 14:51, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Ferretclaw (Alt W) - For Approval
Since this guy had an Alt needing to be done and the description made me think of something, I decided to snatch it up. He was called black and gray, so I gave him a smoke pattern. I'm really really happy with how it turned out. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:20, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

WOAH DUDE Define the back shading? <span style="">7:52 PM, Thu Sep 11, 2014

Reuploaded, shading has been defined, and ear pink has been added since I realized I forgot about it before. :P Jayie  Unwritten words~ 20:42, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. Can't really see the texture through it. This is amazing!! 02:02, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

I played around with it a bit. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:30, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Much better!! ^.^ define the light some on the paws. I know it's difficult to define light on shaded black paws, but if you use something like the highlight on the muzzle, I think it'll blend nicely. 04:47, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Would you mind darkening the black and gray a shade? I think he was called dark gray and black, and this seems to be a bit lighter. If you'd rather not, I'm cool with that, and this is still stunning. *.*

It said on the trivia on his page that he was just gray and black, but I'll darken it a bit, since it was probably a simplification. :) And thanks! Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:58, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Ah, nevermind, I confused him with Heronwing, apologies. I still think the black could be darkened just a bit, though. He was called just gray and black, my bad. x.x

Wait, do you want the black or the gray darkened? And cool. ^^ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:04, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

The black. However, I think darkening the leg shading might do the same thing. I'm sorry if I'm making no sense, I'm so tired

Nah, it's alright, I see what you mean. ^^ I'll see how dark I can push the black, and play around with the leg shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:10, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:16, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Also changed a bit of stuff with texture. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:06, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (Q) - For Approval
meh 04:37, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading more, especially on the face and belly. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:43, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

I think the belly shading is good, but perhaps define the shading on the front legs?

Match > this eye to the other please. I see what you tried to do but it looks a bit odd. If you shade < sides of the eyes you'll get the same effect you're looking for and still have the color match. This is beautiful, Scar!! 04:57, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

And it looks a bit cross-eyed. Maybe try moving >>>> pupil around? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:21, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The eyes are fine. I do all my eyes like this and I'm not changing it 03:59, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're okay. Define the light on the raised backleg a bit? 17:38, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i hate kits <span style="">05:46 Fri Sep 12

define the shading on the head slightly? 11:48, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Benny (Alt KP) ~ CBA
this was too much fun omg. Comments? 20:37, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

The pattern gets lost in the shading. Very beautiful! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:13, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

i can see it just fine tbh.. 01:16, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Tigerbird.. Lighten the shading a tad. 01:52, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think the pattern is fine as well - my reasoning being that if I lighten the shading, it'll seem flat, and then you'll tell me to darken/define it =P 01:54, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Yup, looks good to me. Define the tail light - what a handsome kitty. 09:33, September 13, 2014 (UTC)©

re-up 14:15, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

No comments in a while, and this is amazing, so CBA? <span style="">1:04 Tue Sep 16

Olivenose (Star) ~ For Approval
what are torties? comments? — <span style="">Sat Sep 13 00:26

I can't see the earpink or the tail shading. She is very lovely! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:11, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading on the paw furthest from us a bit. This is /gorgeous/. .o. <span style="">01:23 Sat Sep 13

Give just some more earpink, just so it is visible, because it looks like her ears are very fluffy, covering them. -- 13:32, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

This pattern is very pretty, but it doesn't really match the other images all the way. You need to smudge everything out more like on theirs, especially the ginger on the shoulder. <span style="">16:00 Mon Sep 15 2014

Lizardpaw (A) ~ For Approval
I love playing with texture c: Shading is dark on purpose to be defined and it is smudged so no blurring here. 03:44, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur and shicken the shading on the back and define your light source 04:40, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Or if you won't blur it, smudge it a bit more. It also causes the texture to get lost in it, so perhaps tweak the coloring of the shading a bit?

Re-uploaded. Lightened the shading a smidge, and smudged the back shading more. I also defined the texture under the shading some more so it'd be more visible, and I unshaded and shaded some things to make the light source more obvious. 13:46, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

It's probably just my phone screen but the shading is throwing off the colour a bit (making the image look a strange colour where it is). Maybe try tinting it? Dark red and dark blue with the layer on multply usually work well. however if it /is/ just me feel free to let me know/ignore this comment. <span style="">14:43 Sat Sep 13

I think it looks fine. But I'll look at it closely when I do another upload and check it out but to me it works with the color well. 14:59, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

What source are you using? I'm comparing it to the sources for multiple apprentice images, and I can't seem to find what source you're using. Enlighten me, if you don't mind? pun intended I think there'd be more shading on the haunch, and the back shading wouldn't be so thick.

Lol. Um I visioned this light source like the apprentice is on top of a hill watching the sunset. So it'd be almost straight at him but downwards a bit if ya get me. So I might need a bit more shading on the haunch and the tail so let me add those and then you tell me what ya think. 23:22, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope that makes a bit more sense. I'm not too good at shading apprentices. x.x 03:00, September 16, 2014 (UTC)

Pouncetail (SC) W) ~ For Approval
hmm, he's not bad. Changes be here; comments? 14:45, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading some. He looks purdy, Sorrel 14:47, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes obrigado Beebs 14:53, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a smidge. This is one handsome kitteh =D 15:02, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

It kinda looks like the pattern gets lost in the shading a bit, especially on the main part of the body. Maybe tweak your shading color a bit?

Reups I just decided to lighten the shading a tiny bit; I usually have two layers of shading for definition, the second one's opacity is lightened so it isn't too dark, so I lightened the opacity on that layer a little. 22:19, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Whitetail (WC) (E) ~ For Approval
Sooper happeh with how this came out, minus the earpink. Any help on that would be greatly appreicated. <span style="">4:34 PM, Sat Sep 13, 2014

Make the shading more defined, I think it blurs out into the white a bit too much, it's looking a little gray. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:46, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

reup <span style="">8:01 PM, Sat Sep 13, 2014

Define the tail shading. Nice job! Tigerbird-The-Great 21:03, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

#thanx <span style="">9:16 PM, Sat Sep 13, 2014

Define the depth of the shading some more. This is nice Rocket!! :) 21:28, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading depth looks fine. Define the light on the tail? 14:28, September 14, 2014 (UTC)



Expand the light on the tail- I'd think there would be at least some there, that way it doesn't look all gray.

ship it never thought that onexwhite would be a couple so here have some tail white someone please kill tail shading forever thanx   <span style="">6:50 PM, Sun Sep 14, 2014

Blur the light on the tail. 19:36, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

blurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr <span style="">7:55 PM, Sun Sep 14, 2014

(I'msorry) Define the light on the front paws? 20:08, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

sooper (it'sokay) <span style="">12:20 AM, Mon Sep 15, 2014

What's up with this shading? o.o Did you forget to blur or smudge or accidentally erase something?

That's just my layers going haywire. I'll try to fix it. <span style="">3:05 PM, Mon Sep 15, 2014

fixed it so it's 10000000% more sooper B) <span style="">9:50 PM, Mon Sep 15, 2014

Larkwing (BS) (Kit) ~ For Approval
This was fun c:  Comments? 17:04, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale markings more, and define the shading. 17:08, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Smudged pale markings some more, and defined shading. Better? 17:38, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. I can't see it at all.

'''Re-uploaded. ''' I dont want to change the color of the earpink, since i pulled it directly from the file of the warrior charart. But, i defined it some. Better? 03:15, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shrewfoot (Star) - For Approval
hello

Maybe smudge a bit more fur into the lower part of the ear. The shading looks really good. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 16:17, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Stormcloud (W) ~ For Approval
Ewwww 23:44, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add depth to the shading, it looks flat. <span style="">20:32 Mon Sep 15

Smokefoot (E) ~ For Approval
00:21, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the barely visible front paws.

Ancient Tribe Blanks ~ For Approval


(ill crop all of the extra space on the next upload.) Comments? 03:56, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Why do those look slightly different from these? o.o The blanks should be pixel-like, how the ones in your PI are. Also, if you just want to put one long-haired and one short-haired up, that's fine, that way we don't have four extra images. You can just add eyelashes/remove them, depending on which set you have first. The only difference between male and female ones here are the eyelashes.

Because, I tweaked them a bit. I can easily make them pixelated: I just didn't have enough time right this second. I thought I'd just go ahead and post them now, so I can fix anatomy errors while I'm fixing other issues. ^^` -- 04:19, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Elongate the body, and perhaps make the ears a bit thinner. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:28, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Well, like the other blanks, they do have to be pixelated. I wasn't sure that you were aware of that or not, so I figured that informing you would be a good idea. If you could please do that, I would appreciate it. I won't comment much aside from small issues- anatomy is not my strong point.

Maybe flatten the rump a bit. 06:35, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Add a bit more fluff to the longhaired tails? I told you you'd win! 07:59, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

For the longhaired blanks add more fluffiness all around. <span style="">3:05 PM, Mon Sep 15, 2014

Would you like a redline? <span style="">15:52 Mon Sep 15 2014

Also, in generally I'd recommend flipping them so they don't get confused with the elder blanks. <span style="">15:53 Mon Sep 15 2014

Try smoothing rounding out the line about the shoulder, and maybe make the line for the chest reach all the way down? Sorry if I'm being unclear, I'm crap at wording things >< 16:36, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

The forepaw that goes on top of the other one goes up awkwardly, so maybe try to show that it's connected to the leg? Sorry I am really terrible at explaining stuff like this. <span style="">20:31 Mon Sep 15

Re-uploaded. Better? ^^' I dont have a tablet, so drawing these with a mouse is difficult. ^^' But, i tried to add all of the above. Im aware that i have to fix the eye on the shorthaired blank, and the ear on the longfurred blank. Im aware of some issues, but i didnt have enough time to fix them on this upload. ^^'-- 02:23, September 16, 2014 (UTC)

They still have to be pixelated, and Breezey's suggestion for flipping them so they don't get confused with the elders is a really good idea. ^^

Make it so this > front paw doesn't look so short and almost rectangle-like. Make it more curved like < this one. These are really good. ^.^ 03:08, September 16, 2014 (UTC)

Uhm so I forgot to reflip them around but the image is the same. Here are some redlines. <span style="">3:17 Tue Sep 16 2014

Elongate the body more, lower/flatten the rump a bit especially on the longhair, make the tail way fuller, and flatten the forehead a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:18, September 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Breezy told me the redlines could be used as a reference, or just lined directly over. The redline helped greatly; thank you, Raelic. Better?-- 04:27, September 16, 2014 (UTC)

This looks really good. :) The only thing I can think of is make the tail even fluffier. Look how full this tail is compared to the rest of the cat: http://thornews.files.wordpress.com/2012/02/norsk-skogkatt1.jpg I can do redlines for the tail if you want. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:29, September 16, 2014 (UTC)

Dawn River (Q) ~ For Approval
This shall bring the list of queens to be redone to just Swoop. Well, provided I can get it approved without ragequitting because ''this goshdarned pattern is impossible. '' 12:29, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

It looks good! Lighten the shading just a smidge everywhere but the face. Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:55, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks! 13:03, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the black a bit to match her sharpclaw. <span style="">15:57 Mon Sep 15 2014

Re-ups Fun fact, whilst making this I accidentally used the shorthair blank and had to start over. 16:30, September 15, 2014 (UTC)

Based on the Sharpclaw image, her ginger fur could stand to be darkened a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:58, September 15, 2014 (UTC)