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Smokehaze (Ki) - Withdrawn
05:33, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading out

There's waste near the ear furthest from us. Also, could you remove the shading above the nose, and add some to the chest? 16:36, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened. But I'm confused where us the light source? Moo (talk) 22:56, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

The light source is something similar to this. With this source there would be a tiny bit of light on < this back leg, near the toe line. -- 02:06, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ah right. Lighten the shading? Moo (talk) 05:11, September 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, Vec, could you give me an extension with this and Sasha? My tablet’s lost. -- 04:35, September 10, 2019 (UTC)

We can give you an extension until the 18th, but if you do not find it before then, we would have to decline this. 18:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:28, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you lighten the shading a little perhaps? Maybe expand it onto the shoulder, then smooth it by the base of the tail, face, and haunch. 14:12, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

shading could be smoothed all out in general 21:00, 9/14/2019

'''reuploaded. 21:33, September 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

define the shading more on the tail, remove a bit of the shading on the haunch, and expand the shading behind the front leg closest to us (including the shoulder) 13:32, 9/15/2019

'''reuploaded. 15:16, September 16, 2019 (UTC)'''

Remove some of the shading on the tail. The shading should not cover the whole thing but rather half of it length wise. 16:38, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 05:43, September 17, 2019 (UTC)'''

Also remove some of the shading on the back leg closest to us- with the source there would be a tiny bit of light shining on it, at least remove it to the little line near the haunch. -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 08:58, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

Wrong back leg Ripple- I mean the one closest to us. -- 12:06, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

areas circled in red are some handy dandy places to add some shading

The shading on the ear still looks very flat; try adding some more depth there? 14:27, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:29, September 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

here is a redline; in red is waste, and in blue is where you should remove shading ^^ 18:43, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded, thanks, vec. 17:18, September 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

the shading is leaking away above the tail on the leg; and you could also add some shading to the foot possibly - I think it would be in shadow with this source?

'''withdrawn. 03:55, October 4, 2019 (UTC)'''

Leaf (SqH) (Ki) - For Approval
00:44, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

another Himalayan, I see Lighten the shading, smooth it out as well, and blur/smudge the pale parts. -- 00:46, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

^ adding to potato's comment; smudging them would probably work better to work with the flow of fur on the blank

sorry potato. '''reuploaded. 15:22, September 19, 2019 (UTC)'''

I haven't seen Himalayans with lighter parts before... if you're going to make the image match their parent's, wouldn't it make sense for the darker parts to be the points, and the lighter parts the base? ​​​​​

Oh. Alright. I made the parts lighter because I didn't want it to seem as if I copied Potato's design. 15:35, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Just like to let you know you can do something similar to my design for Squirrel, just maybe do a darker gray and make the hue different than what I have. =D -- 22:54, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:28, September 20, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smudge the pale parts and lighten them some, since I can't see the shading at all in those places. -- 00:29, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Damn. Has this been approved? I wanted to put up a Leaf image. I spent ages... -Wavetail (talk) 07:55, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

it hasn't been approved yet, but this is only for critiques of the image. that said, can you lighten up the points some, they look black right now. 07:57, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

Am I allowed to do that? How...? Also, I put up my own. Should I remove it? Wavetail (talk) 08:10, September 20, 2019 (UTC)

When I tried to smudge, the darker parts got white... the smudge tool hates me. Sorry for being such an unstable person. '''reuploaded. 09:05, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading and expand it on the face. -- 12:09, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:50, September 21, 2019 (UTC)'''

Remove some shading on the foreleg (should only encompass half of the limb like the tail) and same thing with the ear closest to us. 19:48, September 21, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:37, September 22, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add some more depth to the ear shading? 14:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:31, September 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

likewise red is waste, and blue is where you should remove shading. 18:45, September 26, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:06, September 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the earpink a bit more

shading is also leaking away from the lineart above the tail

Still working? ​

'''reuploaded. ye. 03:53, October 4, 2019 (UTC)'''

Jayclaw (K) - For Approval
Comments? Moo (talk) 07:03, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit. -- 12:53, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

I also think the earpink should be duller to match. 18:32, September 19, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the haunch. -- W i n d s o n g   (talk)   20:14, September 21, 2019 (UTC) Bold textreuploaded --Moo (talk) 02:21, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

texture could still be defined, on my screen it looks nearly absent 03:44, September 22, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if it’s just my current screen, but his eyes should be more of grey-blue, they’re looking a little purple at the moment

Reuploaded --Moo (talk) 07:26, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

The texture could still be darker, and the earpink and eyes are still a bit too neon I believe. 14:32, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

To me the earpink and eyes look very similar to the warrior? But texture can be fixed --Moo (talk) 23:12, September 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Moo (talk) 03:39, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

The eye color on the warrior looks more like a bluish gray than the blue on here. I think the base on the warrior also appears to be a few shades lighter. 14:29, September 24, 2019 (UTC)

Who owns the file? Do you know? I think some hex codes would be fab --Moo (talk) 00:28, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the facial shading to curve the shape of the face; reaches too far outwards. Also, Tybaxel should have the warrior's file still

I'm still working I'm just waiting for a file :) --Moo (talk) 01:37, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think Tybaxel has the file? You should ask her. 02:36, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

I did some picking; maybe try #646f7b for the eyes, #666667 for the fur, and maybe use a blue-black for shading, like #222223? Might help match until you get ahold of the files,

Stormcloud (Ki) - For Approval
First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png ​​​

The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. -- 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. -- 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

My art program doesn’t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe

01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe it’s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading 00:42, 9/28/2019

Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesn’t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading over all? 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me if it’s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch.  W i n d s o n g   (talk)   09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink color and darken the stripes a tad. 17:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Welp I tried --Wavetail (talk) 00:40, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes on the body (not the tail). His images show they are just as smudged as the tail stripes. -- 00:42, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna take a while --Wavetail (talk) 00:58, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Someone pls give me something to improve on I’m DYING without anything to work on --Wavetail (talk) 00:11, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

From what I've seen, you can ask for comments after 3-5 days have passed. As for the image, I think the stripe color is still too light and the tail stripes should be slightly thicker to cover more of the tail. -- 00:13, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this is better Potato --Wavetail (talk) 01:27, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Hiiii Wavetail!! I love the stripes! Can you smudge the earpink?  Crystie  ''Can't help  loving  me  14:24, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I over smudged it :P --Wavetail (talk) 23:37, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, I think the earpink could be smudged more. -- 23:40, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

If it isn't already, add the earpink layer under the shading possible? At the moment it looks very flat compared to the area around it which is covered in shading

Could you darken the shading tint? it kinda blends a bit with the stripes at the moment. 15:13, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a tad? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:36, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smokepaw (TNP) (K) - CBA
-- 18:34, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

belly should probably have shading, and the hind foot would probably be covered by the tail/haunch too. 19:16, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 21:25, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the haunch shading a bit? 17:03, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 02:16, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

add a little bit of shading to << side of the shoulder in this area

Reuploaded -- 23:56, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:10, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Shivering Rose (Ki) - CBA
Meep 01:51, 9/29/2019

Could you possibly extend the tail tip a little? On the app it reaches just a smidge further down

Then the mca needs to be tweaked. On the kit which was the master pattern the white was only meant to be on the tail tip itself 01:09, 9/30/2019

I think it matches fine enough, and it would only be maybe a couple pixels. Plus, it's far easier for you to tweak your image (since you have the file), instead of going and fixing someone else's work. Especially moreso in this case since I'm not sure if Squid is currently active on the wiki. I don't understand why we should waste time nominating another image when this one is already on the approval page.

CBA?

Smokehaze (W) ~ For Approval
oh look i'm alive

theres a little corner of waste by the tail on << that side - and maybe also add a little more shading to the stomach area?

Waste is also snagged between the back paws. -- 21:35, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

darken the overall shading a little bit

Stone (Sister) (Ro) CBA


CBA? 16:11, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

As per what I said on Discord about smudging the stripes just a wee bit.

Reuploaded

re-CBA?

Brackenfur (Alt. W 2) - For Approval
Here is your proof Potato can do tabbies that are not pointed. Very proud of this one. -- 00:59, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly match him more to his manga appearance?

Reuploaded I think this matches- added a white tail-tip, more white to the back paw, more stripes on the forehead, and thinned the stripes to match the tabby style. -- 22:57, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be less stripes to match. I'd also, if you're amendable, recommend the eye color be made to match the main set (at least for the most part)

Reuploaded This better? -- 22:42, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Getting so. If one lets go of the past warrior, simply look at what you'd do if making it for the manga rn, and adjust the stripes. Notably, the base on the manga is lighter, the stripes thicker, the haunch one goes to a point and not all the way across, they are more sketchy and not simply drawn, and there are stripes directly next to where the white is on each leg and the tail. Is what I'm noticing so far, do attempt to notice whatever else

Reuploaded will add face stripes momentarily -- 23:49, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow this actually matches in terms of sketch and thin -- 23:52, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the haunch one a little further - make it longer, that is, and smooth the haunch shading. Definitely got what i meant otherwise, thanks

Reuploaded Thanks Spooky! -- 00:11, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Stoneteller (K) ~ CBA
02:47, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:08, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Finchkit (WC) (K) - CBA
16:43, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Smallstar (K) ~ CBA
matched placement to star, old leader, and kit

CBA? 14:04, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (Alt W) - For Approval
In my defense, this side was not ever done, so artist's choice there. I matched everything else to the corresponding side 23:44, 10/02/2019

Actually, this side was done and approved years ago, so there is at least a reference. Regardless, the stripes should be a bit less pointed and more rounded off, imo. A different side doesn't mean we can completely disregard the other image. And maybe make the stripes a tiny bit softer, not too much though.

oof didnt see that bit, sigh.. alright ill have to redo it then <span style="">01:51, 10/03/2019

Dustpelt (Alt.W) - CBA
might as well get this lad up before i forget

CBA? 14:05, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sunnypelt (K) ~ CBA
00:35, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:05, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (K) ~ CBA
00:35, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:05, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Spider Paw (K) - CBA
-- 01:08, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:08, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Rainswept Flower (K) ~ CBA
color picked from the rogue

CBA? 14:08, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Turtlecrawl (Ki) - For Approval
all colors directly from the actual layered file, Jayie sent it to me. No, the app doesn't really have texture that I can see, it's more a shading layer. I'm gonna go fiddle with the black layer to try and get it to match better.

Re-uploaded. Hm, slightly better.

Think the front paw closest to us and the hind paw closest to us should have the lighter ginger patches? The latter may be hidden by the shading idk. 19:28, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mintfur (SkC) (K) - For Approval
I'm probably going to mess with the shading later. 15:55, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:27, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Red (SD) (K) - For Approval
23:00, October 3, 2019 (UTC)