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Stormcloud (Ki) - For Approval
First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png ​​​

The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. -- 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. -- 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

My art program doesn’t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe

01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe it’s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading 00:42, 9/28/2019

Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesn’t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading over all? 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me if it’s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch.  W i n d s o n g   (talk)   09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink color and darken the stripes a tad. 17:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Welp I tried --Wavetail (talk) 00:40, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes on the body (not the tail). His images show they are just as smudged as the tail stripes. -- 00:42, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna take a while --Wavetail (talk) 00:58, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Someone pls give me something to improve on I’m DYING without anything to work on --Wavetail (talk) 00:11, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

From what I've seen, you can ask for comments after 3-5 days have passed. As for the image, I think the stripe color is still too light and the tail stripes should be slightly thicker to cover more of the tail. -- 00:13, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this is better Potato --Wavetail (talk) 01:27, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Hiiii Wavetail!! I love the stripes! Can you smudge the earpink?  Crystie  Can't help  loving  me  14:24, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I over smudged it :P --Wavetail (talk) 23:37, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, I think the earpink could be smudged more. -- 23:40, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

If it isn't already, add the earpink layer under the shading possible? At the moment it looks very flat compared to the area around it which is covered in shading

Could you darken the shading tint? it kinda blends a bit with the stripes at the moment. 15:13, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a tad? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:36, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smudge the earpink as in shading or earpink and fur? --Wavetail (talk) 01:39, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Stripes seem a touch too dark compared to the other images

Reuploaded Too light or too dark?--Wavetail (talk) 22:53, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Too dark, I'm pretty sure she said. Lighten and smooth out the shading and the earpink still seems too... neonish? 04:27, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Will do. Also, I meant if it is still too dark or if I made it too light --Wavetail (talk) 05:26, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Try the following hexcodes for colours; #828282 for the base colour, #575759 for the stripes, and maybe #703F42 for the earpink - those should help match a little more?

Smooth the shading on the cheek --Moo (talk) 07:15, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Recede the facial shading; it should not be touching the eye, but also curve around the neck and wrap around the jaw, like on Jayclaw's kit. -- 18:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I took so long, school term started and I had lots of homework --Wavetail (talk) 08:11, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Jayclaw (K) - For Approval
Ok lets try this again! Moo (talk) 03:36, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading on the ear fluff behind the ear closest to us? Looks like it's leaking shading there. 15:44, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:21, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the facial shading so it curves with the shape of the face; it shouldn't stretch all the way to the eye, but rather curve and also cover the chin

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 05:22, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

It still goes and hits to the eye; I do mean to say, that it needs to recede from there.

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 06:46, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Colours are still off a little bit, and I think its mainly your shading tint that's doing it? I've repicked colours for your this time, instead of giving straight hexcodes. The nose should be black per the warrior, and the eyes need to be a paler blue than what you've got at the moment. Could you also define the shading depth a little - just add a second layer of shading that covers areas that will be darker like the "neck" and the underside of the tail and such - like this image. One last thing too, I promise, maybe smudge the earpink a little more so it's not sitting in such a straight line?

Reuploaded and colourpicked! Moo (talk) 08:07, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth a touch more? -- 18:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 22:43, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Moonlight (Leader) - CBA
17:34, October 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you define the shading depth?

Maybe “poof”-ify the tail, like the other images have? I’m not seeing that edited tail here. ​​​

Darken the dark parts? 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

god i can't believe i forgot the poofy tail lol, clown alert...i will add the poofy tail later bc i don't have time for it atm, i fixed everything else though 18:47, October 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Still working? (have to ask, comment on the floof tail still stands)

reuploaded 01:00, October 15, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA?

Snowbird (Ki) - For Approval
i won't withdraw this, i promise. 02:28, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a lot, but, also maybe use less? Sometimes white cats can be painfull with shading so by using less you can save yourself a lot of trouble. Also add some shading to >> that side of the cat, behind the tail

'''reuploaded. 14:44, October 8, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the shading overall and add ear shading to the ear closest to us? 23:14, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading just a small touch imo, seems a bit dark currently imo, given it isn't tinted

'''reuploaded. 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can you define the shading on the foreleg? 15:22, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. 00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

I think the shading on the tail can be smoothed a bit more. 15:13, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading on the shoulder/above the foreleg needs to be smoothed out, and the facial shading expanded. -- 18:29, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (W) - For Approval
03:56, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Should I remove eye shading? 14:53, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, and define the light on the tail? 23:15, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:59, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add a bit more depth to the front legs shading, and smooth it out a touch on the haunch

'''reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. 00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the shading on the shoulder, and define the light (remove shading) on the tail. 15:14, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the earpink? I can't see it at all. 20:34, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

The eyeshine in < this eye appears to be overblurred. Can you also erase a few pixels on the eyeshine so more of the general pupil shows? -- 03:31, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) (W) ~ CBA
15:08, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Stormfur (K) - For Approval
stormy baby -- 15:28, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the texture should be much sharper? 22:56, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:59, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the base is too dark, by a little. Perhaps grab a file from Skye for the CG or whatnot

Reuploaded Colorpicked from the CG again. This should be correct. -- 23:26, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the texture ever so slightly, so it’s not so pencily?

Reuploaded -- 19:06, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be more texture and have it overlapping more? 22:48, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Drop me your email on my talk page and I can shoot you a file or two if you'd like. ​

Reuploaded I think I can hang on without the files for now, but thanks for the offer =) -- 22:57, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Add more of the darker (more orange shades) to the eye; it seems like in porportion, the others have a lot less of that yellowyish when there is space for it to be seen

Sandynose (Alt. K) - CBA
sandy boy manga set now complete. -- 23:16, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

And I forget the tail-tip. I'll add that in a moment. -- 23:18, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 23:21, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking from the middle bit onto -> that side the "knee" area - also could you maybe the leg and the shading on the far right of the image?

Reuploaded I assume you meant smooth so that's what I did. -- 01:55, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 03:22, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

I REALLY Hate to break CBA and I might be wrong but I think the shading could be a bit more defined? Moo (talk) 22:45, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

May I please get a second opinion? I can see the shading on two different screens fine. And Millie, make sure you change the heading when breaking a CBA. -- 22:47, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to define/expand it on the tail. ​

Reuploaded -- 22:58, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Piper (K) - CBA
20:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Stoatfur (CJ) (W) ~ For Approval
02:35, October 15, 2019 (UTC)

Shellheart (K) ~ For Approval
02:35, October 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (W) - For Approval
wasn't struck out on the oa claim list?

Needletail (W) - For Approval
tried making the texture match the app? dunno how well i did lol

Silverstream (W) - For Approval
this was tricky - matched the body stripes to the queen, but the chest stuff to the starclanner?

Shattered Ice (W) ~ For Approval
Ah, the joys of schoolwork and not having any free time :)  01:14, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Define/Add more shading to the hind paw closest to us? 01:39, October 16, 2019 (UTC)