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Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more 18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please 01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs 21:32, 5/15/2017

Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more 00:56, 5/17/2017

Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

What means tad? – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

tad means a little bit.

Do I have to do something with legs? – 07:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

All you have to do is smooth the shading more over the whole image, and define the speckles a little bit in the shading 13:55, 5/18/2017

Reupload – 08:56, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin out the shading on her stomach a little? After that I think it'll be good to go. If I wasn't very specific, you can just say that. Basically what I meant is like the shading up from the haunch. 20:20, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken the speckles even more? Also if you're American you might be forgiven for not knowing tad, it's chiefly british --

I am russian ::::\ – 13:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

I noticed no one ever answered your question about shading depth and I still think it could be defined so here's an image of one of the apprentice tutorials, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:BCPrincess73.tutorial.png, which mentions shading depth so I hope that helps you

Reupload Would you like some vanilla ice cream with chocolate chips? – 10:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

It looks white, and less creamy white 19:39, 5/22/2017

Smooth out the body shading

Reupload – 08:21, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The shading could be smoothed more. 13:30, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

i dunno XXXX| – 15:45, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible or define it a bit more? It's hard to see it on my screen. Unless others see it just fine on their screens. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 02:37, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

I do think it wouldn't hurt to smooth just the neck shading. 20:17, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Are you really sure? – 06:55, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

well people dont generally just say things for the sake of it so yeah they're sure lol. anyway to fix the problem just ligten it by like 10% or smth then gaussian blur if ur lazy and patch up the leaking areas. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:13, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload What means "patch up the leaking areas" – 15:49, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the earpink a little not more? I'm still having trouble visualizing it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 18:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the neck shading again and also smooth out the tail-tip shading? And also, to answer, patching up leaking areas is referring to the shading-away-from-the-lineart leakage that sometimes happen when gaussian blurring, so yeah.^^

Smooth out the shading on the hips and shoulder/chest a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:32, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 13:42, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink more? 15:26, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit, it looks kinda dark to me. --  Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  04:28,5/28/2017

After you define the earpink, smudge it a bit? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 00:11, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

I am still working – 15:56, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload

Smooth out the shading on the tail tip and the neck area

to save you some time from other ppl commenting tbh just smooth out all of the shading in general   Life actually sucks 24/7   so    lol 11:49, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Still

Reupload – 11:12, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink

You've been asked to define the ear pink multiple times and to save you some trouble of getting asked even more, just darken it a few shades.

Reupload – 08:47, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Daisytoe (A) ~ For Approval
Disneytoe's my last image before I become a warrior! Go go go! --

Good job Neon! Maybe define the eye depth, unless there is some already. Cosmokitten (talk) 10:18, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Decided that even though there was depth that it needed some definition. Fixed. --

Define the shading a bit? I like this, good job! Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:55, May 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smooth/smudge the shading on the top of the hindleg closest to us and the base of the tail. 13:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit, it looks flat. 19:35, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like all the shading could be smoothed out tbh <span style="">19:48, 5/19/2017

I believe the mickey mouse head on the chest is facing the wrong way. On the warrior and kit image, the head is facing sideways. This has it facing right side up. The patch on the back should be further up the back near the shoulders and the ears on the mickey head on the haunch need to be smaller. There should also be a tiny patch of gray on the furthest back paw. And I feel like all of the gray could be a tiny bit softer. 20:07, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Define shading depth more. 00:12, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

How's this? It turned out I errored when re-uploading, so my first re-upload was the same image as the first. --

Maybe desaturate the purple? I had the same problem, don't worry, but it seems too light/colorful. Maybe darken in a few ticks? And smooth it out? <span style="">15:47, 5/20/2017

Re-ups --

The shading could be smoothed out on the belly, and > half of the cat overall

Define the shading, the shading depth, define the eye depth, smooth the ear pink. 14:46, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail. <span style="">19:37, 5/22/2017

Still working?

Re-ups sure i am --

I don't think it reuploaded correctly - It looks like the same image as the one before. 09:37, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

On the mickey mouse head on the haunch, the ears need to be smaller in comparison to the "head" circle. 15:24, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the upper back, it all looks a bit hard-edged. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:39, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Smooth the shading a little bit more. 02:46, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth

Re-ups tfw you're ready to re-up but then you see "define depth" --

Define the shading a little? 13:07, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

The tail shading is leaking I'm pretty sure, and the shading all over the image could be defined a bit more. The shading depth too <span style="">09:46, 6/02/2017

Re-ups *takes bite of snackoo* I feel like it's lighter on a PNG than it looks like on GIMP. Can you redline it, Broken?

Smooth shading and define shading depth

Re-ups no srsly broken get me your redline --

Smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us. 23:35, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

sharpen the mickeys a little - they seem more blurred/ less defined in shape than the other images

Dust Muzzle (W) - CBA
It's been too long since I've done one of these. But now I'm finally free from school taking up my time. :P I'm pretty sure I got the pattern right. Thoughts? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 22:17, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a little? It's kind of dark. --

Define shading on tail a little

Is it me or is it just the shading, but the tail seems to be a different color grey than the main body. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:38, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

I think that's a mixture of shading and highlights. Jayie's shading always has tons of stuff that goes with it, including probably multiple layers of fun things. lol I love Jayie's shading so much.

Still working?

Reuploaded. The tail looks different because the shadow is on the stripes on the main part of the body, making them look darker, and the highlights are on the main fur color, making it look lighter. On the tail, the shading is reversed because of how the light is positioned, resulting in the main color looking darker and the stripe color looking lighter. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 18:29, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

I hope this doesn't sound rude, but why is the shading on the body black, but it's not nearly as dark on the tail?

Smoothen out the shading that comes down from the back and right onto the front leg closest to us...so, I guess the shoulder arch thing? I hope you understand. 20:18, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Reuploaded. Not sure why I didn't get email notifications for this. And I explained the reason why the shading on the tail looks differnt above. Jayie Just yo u wait~

I think what you explained above was about the color underneath the shading but I'm asking about the color of the shading itself. The shading on the tail seems much less dark than the shading on the body I'm sorry I'm not trying to be difficult I just don't think you understood my question  so maybe just define the shading on the tail a little bit?

Reuploaded. The shading is the same color on the whole image. I didn't use black shading at all. It's the same level of darkness as on the body. It looks lighter because the shading on the tail is over a lighter color (the light underside of the tail) while the shading on the back is over the darker color (the stripes). Here's the image without shading: http://www.ezimba.com/work/170606C/ezimba18082948671200.png and here's the shading (it's three layers of light purple on multiply, but I put them as normal here so you could see the colors) http://www.ezimba.com/work/170606C/ezimba18082946177300.png Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 03:12, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Guys, it don't have to match in darkness because your eyes don't see it as the same. There are stripes, and the stripes can make it appear darker than it really is. <span style="">21:30, 6/06/2017

CBA? There is no rule that shading darkness has to match throughout the entire image.

Blossom (W) - For Approval
I don't like how this turned out tbh. 20:00, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ginger-y patches this should have - they're supposed to be the color #c95a1e (a medium ginger), but I can't really them on here

It looks like there's something leaking on the rump right next to the tail line art 20:26, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:54, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the body, tail, and front leg closest to us. 22:12, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

You want the file? it'd be extremely helpful and i don't think this honestly matches that well...

Sure Fox, but what format would it be in? I use gimp. 22:56, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's mainly the pattern that's the issue. I'll fix the pattern once I get the file from Fox. 23:18, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

smooth out the neck shading.

Reuploaded I don't think there's much of a difference. 09:59, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible and smooth it out some more? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 13:01, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now it looks worse??? 17:06, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

if you're using GIMP, tick the hard edged option on the smudge tool, and try and smudge the white from there.

Also the ginger on her other images doesn't appear to be that bright

Reuploaded Well, it's getting better. 23:53, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

yep, looking good. i would smooth out the shading everywhere and smooth out the white a little

Reuploaded I feel like I smoothed the white out too much. (Although, smudging it instead of blurring it to smooth it out would be a better idea...) 01:45, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

The patches look more ,, roughly?? smudged on her other images

Reuploaded How's this??? 22:43, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

try and go for a softer look on the white and not show any of the smudge marks

Reuploaded I feel like I'm doing something wrong. 19:02, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Doesn't this have to match the rogue image? This looks like it's matching the es and that's a different pose than the warrior blank 20:08, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded reuploaded it then i realized i was on a different account... so oops 21:47, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

smooth out the neck shading a lot

Reuploaded 13:51, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
She's back you guys. (Snowdapple said I could post this after it was archived so here ya go)

Near the tail diagonal almost from the very back patch, the shading's a little blotchy. 00:21, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading

smooth the shading.

re-up Why won't you smooth out????

There's a little bit of leaking shading where the body meets the tail. 01:22, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

you think you could remove some of the white dots in the pupil? it makes it hard to see

re-up There's no leaking shading, it's probably just the texture.

No, look at the area I circled in red. The patch of shading I was trying to point out to you doesn't touch the lineart at all and also looks kind of hard edged. If it's texture, you should probably smooth it out there or whatnot because the shading really does appear to be leaking. 20:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Eh, not too happy.

its not like ivy's suggestion damaged ur image lol. just had to point that out. Life actually sucks 24/7  so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:50, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the brown patch on the > front leg could be a little bigger, as it seems to cover more length on the apprentice

re-up Redid the texture because I didn't like it.

Beautiful! Maybe define the texture just a tiny bit? Good job! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:57, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you add a tiny bit of shading on <- ear?

Prehaps define the tail shading better <span style="">21:26, 6/06/2017

Sweetbriar (W) - For Approval
<span style="">16:26 Wed May 31

These stripes are a bit too sharp. I know you probably did it the same way on the kit, and the StarClan is the same way, but this really should be smudged a fair bit more.

Reuploaded Also made the muzzle shading look less like a stripe. <span style="">23:56 Wed May 31

Define the shading depth on the main body

Smoothen out the white chest. 22:23, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

tbh i think the chest is fine cuz its the same style as her other images   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 11:41, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

I know you're the OA of the kit, but are you sure the white should cover the entire chest like that? It seems like it only covers a little bit of the chest on the kit, queen and star. Also, I agree the white could be softened just a bit <span style="">23:40, 6/03/2017

Still working?

Reuploaded I was visiting a friend from college for a while. <span style="">18:14 Tue Jun 6

Hawkfoot (Alt. Star) ~ CBA
Comments? 03:18, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Minor, but could you make the <--- eye darker blue to match better? It looks like two different coloured eyes atm. 03:21, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? 03:26, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit? Not sure if desktop screen or not, but it seems pretty dark.

On my screen it looks about right? I think a well-suited darkness. But it depends on whatever other people think, and it could go either way. 04:19, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

imo it could be lightened, but then again my screen is dark af

and mine's the exact opposite (max brightness yo), and I'm seeing extremely dark shading, hence why I commented.

I think the shading is fine, but if anything, you could lighten it just a little bit. Anyways, define eye depth a little. 13:21, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eye depth is ticky to do on this blank, using the method I do, so I changed the color to see if that helped. Also, I'd rather not lighten the shading, as I'm already having trouble seeing it, and my screen also makes things seem lighter that they are. I think the problem is that the base is quite dark, so I had to use an even darker color for the shading. 18:00, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

There is some eye colour leaking on the eye farthest from us.ErmineGlow (talk) 18:12, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

He looks red-brown. 18:49, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

shouldn't the eye colour be orange? she has no eye colouring errors. 19:15, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There is no eye color leaking; trust me, I check. Colorpick from Spikefur again, since that seems to be the only dark brown I can do that's not too red. As for the eyes, I'm going to keep them for now, as I was told, when doing Moonflower's alt warrior that it was fine. 19:34, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

It is representing an incorrect description, so I think the eyes are  fine. As for the brown, it still looks really red, so maybe colorpick from Tigerstar or Bramblestar? That should look good <span style="">19:41, 6/01/2017

It might just be my screen, but it doesn't look red-brown at all??

there's a confirmed eye colour and no eye error, and it's not allowed on other alts so why should it be on this? :/ moonflower has eye colour errors. she doesnt. 19:44, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

^^^ The eyes should be her normal eye color

Reuploaded. Just curious, would I need to tweak Brackenfur's 5th alt warrior? It has blue eyes, which he is never described with. As for the base, I colorpicked directly from his file, so if this is too red, then all of Spikefur, Squirrelwhisker, and Deerfoot's images would have to be tweaked, as I used the same color of brown for each of them. 19:59, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

i would say so for brackenfur yea. 19:23, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

The eyes look like different colors. It's probably just where the light source is and how you do eyes, but it still bothers me a little bit. 13:37, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is about as good as it's going to get. 19:07, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the ear shading a tad <span style="">06:46, 6/05/2017

Reuploaded. 17:04, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:21, 6/06/2017

Fallowtail (Star) ~ CBA
04:48, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Looks like the shading near the tail is leaking or something? Looks weird, idk how to describe it. <span style="">05:13, 6/01/2017

I think Broken is referring to the tail shading that looks like is leaking onto the flank near the tip of the tail. 06:37, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah I am^ <span style="">19:38, 6/01/2017

Perhaps that was done intentionally to show the tail's shadow on the flank? Idk. Regardless, I think the shading by the tail tip should be swapped to left side, since the light appears to be coming from the right side based on all the other parts of the image. 19:43, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:21, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink? 23:28, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reup 02:18, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Are the eyes supposed to be different colors Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:56, June 3, 2017 (UTC)chat

...they aren't? The <--- eye just has so little room to show depth, but it has the same colours as the other eye. Should I somehow alter it? 19:08, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth a little bit more in the eyes? <span style="">23:36, 6/03/2017

Reuploaded I tried. 03:53, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the flank texture flow better with the shape. It seems too straight across imo. <span style="">06:43, 6/05/2017

Reup 14:06, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:22, 6/06/2017

Milkfur (RC) (MCA) ~ CBA
I'm tired of mulling over this so here I am throwing this out to for the world to see. First attempt with smudged shading. 06:29, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be texture on the gray or am I just really blind? <span style="">19:37, 6/01/2017

I also think the stripes might be a little more smudged on the other images. 19:40, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's supposed to be texture on the stripes too. 20:04, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups 18:05, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Darkened the stripes 02:00, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define face shading?

Reups 23:18, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:22, 6/06/2017

Hazel Burrow (App) ~ CBA
I'm really proud of this, but the shading seems off.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:07, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

so like you dont have to do this, but this is just a solution as to fix why it might look "off" to you: in most light sources the shading probably covers more surface area and has more curvature to the flow of the body compared to how it does on this image (it just follows the linear art), it looks awkward because the shading makes the image look like its 20 flat pieces of paper shaped like the cat layered on top of each other as opposed to being a 3d cat irl. TLDR so the solution i propose is to probably expand the shading just by like 3 pixels or something like that especially on the stomach and haunches.   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:47, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

ok so i think the above post sounded slightly offensive n i apologize fren, i was just trying to be constructive as possible   Life actually sucks 24/7   so  <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 11:47, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

It's okay, I guess. I'm gonna redo the shading anyways. I was just trying out something different. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 12:32, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading looks a lot better now! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 01:58, June 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups. Smoothed out shading on paws. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 20:46, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups again. Fixed some leg shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 23:31, June 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe you could ask for the kit file, because the black seems way too dark and I can't really see the shading. <span style="">06:41, 6/05/2017

ok so torches down but tbh i think the colors match p well... and i do see the shading idk feel free to disagree. also BEAUTIFUL shading holy crap   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 10:34, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does this look better? I do have the file, it still looks dark, but it's the correct colors. And thanks. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 16:07, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. All right, should be good now! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:17, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:22, 6/06/2017

Doestar (K) ~ CBA
someone send help this is so bad i wanna puke

Define the shading and ear pink

Re-uploaded i expanded the ear pink bc i can't change the color

CBA? <span style="">19:23, 6/06/2017

Deerpaw (TC) (K) ~ For Approval
kitty. This matches the apprentice, and I also think the only place the white speckles would show is the belly, since the rest are on the back/top of the haunch and such on the other images

Gonna get shot for this, but I think the white would be visible on the sides. Why would it only be visible on the stomach without seeing the flanks? The apprentice's white dots are visible on the stomach and sides, so I think it would be visible from this angle too. <span style="">21:51, 6/05/2017

Agreed ^^ Smooth out the shading on the <--- leg?

I agree with Broken. Smooth out the shading on the tail a little bit. 23:32, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded No, the white doesn't show on both sides of this blank. < side of the cat only shows the chest and that goes into the leg - and the chest clearly doesn't have spots on the apprentice, as it's not specified in the description. I added a few speckles on the very far > side, but this blank really doesn't have a haunch, persay, and the specific way I chose to put the apprentice's spots on the belly and sides (which in essence, I only made them stretch to the top of the back from the belly, and arch over the haunch), I can't put them where you're suggesting because it'd be a contradiction to the placement of the apprentice. They don't go onto anywhere but the top of the haunch, along the back, and because this is such a small blank, it doesn't have that.

I still feel like the white dots should wrap around the side. <span style="">18:55, 6/06/2017

Can you explain anatomically how that makes sense? As seen on other kit images (Beetlewhisker, Blossomfall, Benny, Fleck, etc.) there is only coloring up alongside to wrap all the way around when there is white covering the haunch. The haunch on the apprentice is this area, and so that's why I added a few light speckles on the very --> side of the image, because those could show.. However, in that red are I've circled, which is also the haunch - has no speckles at all. If I add the speckles to wrap all the way around the side, I'd be adding them onto the kit's haunch. Those other images show that that area's the haunch, not just the side, even though the blank is tiny and could perhaps appear that way. I want a another opinion explaining how that makes sense, because I can't see it, because to me no spots on the apprentice haunch = no spots on the kit haunch because of matching images.

I think that what Broken means is that the dots go up further along the -> side, almost reaching the neck, but not going on the haunch. 20:16, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded See thing is, there aren't spots on the neck of the other image, so can't go all the way up there, nor are there spots on the shoulder or behind the shoulder, so it can't go all the way up the side because the apprentice doesn't show that.

Mouse Ear (W) ~ For Approval
mirror mirror on the wall who has the smallest ears of them all 22:36, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smallear does. Maybe smooth out the shading on the belly a little bit and/or the tail? May just be my screen lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 22:55, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit. 23:39, June 5, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:10, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (L) - For Approval
Here he is! Comments? 17:09, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and blur the stripes a little more. They look softer on his other images. 17:48, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:00, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there are more stripes on the ancient and sharpclaw. Also, smooth the shading some more everywhere. <span style="">18:52, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Okay, I added a tail stripe and a haunch stripe, but if this needs more stripes still then I'll add more. :P 19:18, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I really think you should add stripes at least to the tail. There are 13 stripes (I think I counted right) on the tails of both of the other images, whereas this only has eight, which is significantly less. 20:14, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes look blotchy, and the shading, I can't tell the difference. Did ya smooth it? <span style="">21:35, 6/06/2017

Reuploaded Well, I sure did try! :) 21:47, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The face stripes don't appear to match the other images

Reuploaded I'm going off of the ancient image. 22:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Just wanna pop in and say that the sharpclaw image is first in the set. 22:54, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah. You gotta match both of 'em Shy. Also, well done on the approved images of yours. I'm genuinely proud of you on your progress. <span style="">22:56, 6/06/2017

Pricklekit (RC) (Ki) - For Approval
howdy folks

I think there's more stripes in the little brown patches. Cute <span style="">21:33, 6/06/2017

The ends of the patches look softer on the star. 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

reups I really need to do a charart that's not a kit, warrior, or star. Call me unoriginal™

reups fixed some things that bothered me

Maybe define the head shading a smidge? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:40, June 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Smooth shading near the rear?(No rhyme intended! :P) 21:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad, and define the light on <-- paw. Also, I belive there is leaking shading on --> back paw, and eye color leaking outside the lineart. <span style="">21:39, 6/06/2017

Reups Thanks Shypaw! And broken, the front paw you're talking about isn't supposed to have any light on it. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, maybe add some shading to the <--- ear (just a tad) and darken the nose colour? 22:15, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think there is any nose color, and if there is, define it a bit <span style="">22:33, 6/06/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:34, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the front paw farthest from us. Also, lighten the shading a little bit? 22:37, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

I'm confused with your shading placement. The shading on the tail, back, and chest/neck area indicate that the light is coming from <--- (from the right/behind the cat) while the legs, haunches, and head indicate that the light is coming from the ---> (from the left/in front of the cat). I believe you're going to have to switch one of these in order for it to make sense. 23:06, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I switched around the shading. Is it better now? --ErmineGlow (talk) 13:49, June 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading around the belly and definitely the face shading need to be swapped now. Also, define the light on the closest hind paw.