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Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Now blur the shading. 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Chest shading needs to be blurred and lightened. 11:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

^ Looks like someone forgot to sign! 00:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:44, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; other than that, I think its awesome! =3 21:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source. 23:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:12, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''Re-uploaded. 11:23, October 12, 2011 (UTC)'''

Darken the shading a bit. 14:32, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 11:02, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the neck shading just a tad? 15:11, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the haunch shading and lighten the chest shading alot more. 23:49, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:11, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

She is. She's just not home to work on it. =/ 03:48, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm back! Anyways, Reuploaded. 10:56, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Applefur (W) - Tweaked
Alright, original artist was Honeyfur :3. Tweaked the shading, fixed the mottles, and altered the base color a tad to make her more brown. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:25, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading a lot. 22:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you mottled the earpink too. Define the earpink and make it a solid color. 02:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And there's a random stripe running down her back. Any way to get rid of? Sky- Stealing all ur  candy 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. '''better~? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:31, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred and the mottles look more like dapples. 20:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:31, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

While you're at it, blur the earpink as well, and make it a little more triangular. Looks good. 15:09, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It might just be me, but on her chest there's some pinkish stuff that makes it look like skin. Maybe remove those? 20:19, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded~! '''the pinkish stuff was some desaturated shading. I altered the base color because that was the only way to get rid of it without killing it T.T. I would prefer not changing the mottles. If I did, the entire image would have to be redone, which is more effort than I would like.

The shading needs to be lightened and blurred. The mottles need to be changed, though. 15:04, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Why do the mottles need to be changed? Elorisa~ 15:20, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

I've stated above. 15:41, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Is there really that big of a difference between mottles and dapples? There are around 3 images that have mottles similar to mine, and there was no fuss about them. Criminal Scum Stealing from the Imperial City;  one house at a time~ 15:51, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is a difference...and there is some blurred lineart. 14:03, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up about a pixel, and make it easier for someone to see it, 'cause I'm having a really hard time. 18:40, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 15:15, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Pouncetail (W) - Redone
Tried matching it as best I could ^^' So anywho, redone as longhair and added stripes. Originally by Sandstar12. Comments? 18:16, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, blur thew htei, darken the shading, blur the shading, and liughten the ear pink. 22:28, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

^ ??? Anyways, there's some lighter pixels along his haunch, or is that part of the white? 23:11, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think she meant "blur the white" but her letters got mixed up. As for the white on the haunch, it wasn't supposed to be there but when I used gaussian blur the markings just kinda spilt onto the haunch. I got rid of it. 23:56, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a tad. 10:58 Sun Oct 16

Blur it as well. 17:23, October 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. -- 20:06, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Technically, since each user is supposed to stay with the same character, wasn't I supposed to do this one? :3 Lighten the stripes a bit to match the elder version. 22:10, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fff, forgot about that ^^' Can we make an exception? I mean, I've already done this one and all. I'm sorry for practically taking your image, Misty xD -- 22:56, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead. Did you get the colors off of the elder version? It seems darker, still. 22:59, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mhm, but Icestorm told me to darken it, so I made the stripes from normal to multiply (to make them darker). I could make them back to normal, if needed. -- 23:01, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, this should match the elder version, so I guess it should be normal... 23:01, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blame Icestorm. Dunno if the changes are showing :P -- 23:05, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Theres orange in the middle of the white under the chin, if its supposed to be there sorry, but if not get rid of it. 23:26, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add more stripes to it and maybe darken them juuuuust a tad so it matches the elder version a bit better? This is BEAUTIFUL Splashy! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:20, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (W) - Redone
OA was Blackclaw09 and it needed to resemble Spottedleaf's image... I couldn't get it to look as amazing as Iceheart's image, but I tried... Comments? 05:47 Sun Oct 16

This is amazing! Define ear-pink please, Leaf-storm,9:13,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :3 10:53 Sun Oct 16

Good :) Define the mottles and blur the shading on the white. 14:00, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:58 Sun Oct 16

And it was my picture, too. Spottedleaf. Definet he mottles a TINY bit more. 01:57, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the darker patches a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:14, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah, Icestorm, it was your image, too, but I just looked at the last edits. 00:04 Tue Oct 18

Define the earpink and blur the chest shading more. 21:54, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Earpink is the bane of my existence. 06:04 Wed Oct 19

Jaggedtooth (W) - Redone
Hey, Im warrior today! yahuu. I tryied match him with rogue charart, OA was Sandstar12 Leaf-storm,20:33,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Congrats, and job well done, Leaf. Lighten the shading a tad. 20:40, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Enlarge the chest highlight/thin out the shading around that area. I'm not sure if you use highlights or not, so choose either option that'll work best for you. ;) 20:56, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think I not understard you correctly Rainy.. hmm but reuploaded Leaf-storm,13:13,October 17,2011 (UTC)

The shading is kind of weird... it doesn't make sense, really. Try to make it match this tutorial and it'll make more sense. 00:19 Tue Oct 18

ah! I forget say reuploaded! Leaf-storm,19:03,October 18,2011 (UTC)

Move the chest highlight up more. 23:27, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded - Leaf-storm,15:07,October 19,2011 (UTC)

Foxheart (W) Redone
first one in a while..Lets see if I can do this. Jeez, i need to lay of the tabbies for a while. OA=Fawnstorm - 01:41, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

And I forgot save teh layers, Im so smart, aint I? - 01:42, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, dear. Blu the shading, or the stripe that runs from the tail to the base of the tail - and the stripe that outlines the chest and back. 01:44, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea what you just said. what about the stripes again? - 02:00, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, forget about it i just redid the whole thing - 03:59, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste between the fore and back legs. Awesomeness. 15:31, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit. 23:28, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspelt (Alt. Q) - Redone
Argh, the charart that was up for approval for FIVE MONTHS. Original artist was me, and she needed to be longhaired. 20:44, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Haha! I remeber this one. Blur the shading. =) 21:13, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also made the earpink more visible. 21:42, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more; its still hard to see. 22:17, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wait for the changes to show. 23:52, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think you forgot to fill in the nose of this pretty cat. :3 Sky- Stealing all ur  candy 00:02, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. I know you did it already, but it needs to be defined a little more. XD Also brighten it. And I remember this one, I had JUST come into the PCA when it was up, and I kept wondering why it was up for so long. XD Honestly it looked fine to me. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:06, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly add some/more depth to the eye. Also, it may be me, but I think you really need to blend the shading in. It doesn't really look 3-D at the moment. I would just use the smudge tool and smudge the shading like chararts where you can see the texture of the pelt and then blur it somewhat. Or if you use layers and gimp (I think Pixlr has the filter too), I suggest using the gaussian blur. Other than that, I love the color and it looks awesome! :D 23:01, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Husker (Lo) - Redone
OA was Nightwhisker98, it needed redoing. 21:14, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define and enlarge the ear pink. This looks much better. 21:15, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded. Changes not showing. 21:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add some slightly darker shading to the belly and other lower parts to make it look more three demensional. 21:50, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Now with more depth for your viewing pleasure! :D 00:36, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you redden the earpink? 22:09, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the kittypet image, so I don't think I should. 22:42, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps make it smaller though...also there's a bit of waste below the tail. Just tilt the screen if you cannot see it :P. Awesome otherwise! :D 22:56, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Got rid of all the waste I could find. Made earpink smaller. 00:39, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hattie (KP) - Redone
Again, I have permission from the PCA deputy to redo this one. Its stripes needed to be redone, and it had some blurred lineart. OA was Icethroat21. 22:44, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading 02:14 Tue Oct 18

Re-Uploaded. 20:48, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes more orange, they look kinda red. 23:31, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading a bit more. 06:05 Wed Oct 19

Owl Feather (Q)~ Redone
OA was Sandstar12, needed to match the sharp claw image. Didnt really work out. 23:57, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define hte earpink and darken the tail shading. Nice job! 21:56, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine and the tail is too skinny to really do anything with the sading. 23:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) (Ki) - Tweaked
Believe it or not, this is actually a tweaked image. I did the flecks, tabby, and shading all over top the old image. OA was Honeyfur. I ended up having to work on the shading as it was very light. And I am doing this as per the new rule to stick with a character. Comments? 15:01, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Enlarge and define hte earpink, and dablur the chest shading. 21:58, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gawhjous. Darken the shading between the front legs. 23:34, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (K) - Redone
Comments? OA was Dawnleaf. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:25, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

And it was redone as a longhair. Nice job! Make the nose black, redden the earpink, and blur the shading. 22:26, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:02, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Halftail (E) - Tweaked
Ok, so the original artist was Bramble, I thickened the stripes and shading, and added patchy fur. Comments? 22:53, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Have some fur around the patches on his back stand up, I think. 23:09, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:18, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, keep missing the archive. Oh well, I'll get my image up eventually. XD Anyways, could you mess with the hue/saturation on it so it matches his warrior? Or should the warrior be tweaked to match this? Either way, they don't match and that will need to be fixed. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:13, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, xD, sorry about that. Yes, that warrior image needs to be tweaked because according to his description, he had patchy fur as a warrior as well. 03:56, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (WC) (W) - Redone
Redone as short hair, like the MC, OA is Ashshadow. `Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 23:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eye a bit, it looks almost the same color as the pelt right now. Good job! :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:21, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

You know it's the same colour as the Med cat...xDSky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 03:24, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudtail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA is Icey (Icestorm, not Iceheart), and it needed to have the shading redone. 15:21, October 19, 2011 (UTC)