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Cloud (Storm) (Alt. E)- For Approval
Comments? I might need to smooth out the shading, I'll do that tomorrow. 02:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

there's a bit of waste behind the head

next to the ear too actually. also there appears to be shading leaking around the haunch/underbelly area.

The shading should be smoothed too and it wouldn't hurt tk add a tad more depth.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

define light more on the front paws please. --

06:39, 4/17/2019

Reuploaded  23:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the front leg. smooth out the shading on the haunch and add depth everywhere

can you also define the shading on the ear? 02:40 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded  21:42, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

smudge the pelt into the earpink and the shading is still really blotchy. Also, most of the shading suggests that the light is coming from over the back, but the face and the placement of the light in the eye suggests that it's coming from the front 06:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste next to the ear

Reuploaded tried with the shading depth, how does this look? 21:38, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, rump and the space between the belly and tail I think. JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded should be gone now! 02:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading --

16:02, 4/20/2019

Reuploaded how is dis, Silver? 17:02, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste by the tail, legs and head! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  01:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste-free! 02:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. 03:19, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded how's this? 03:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it on the legs and flank, and define it on the face? 13:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice also defined the tail's light. There is already shading on the face, it's below the ear closest to us. 15:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed more, pretty much everywhere, save for the head. There appears to be shading leaking on the tail, belly, and limbs. Can you also define the shading on the one paw furthest from us and inside the ear?

I'll work on this soon. Who said that, btw? 22:55, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Patch said it, the power of history logs! 00:33, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and smooth the shading you erased on the tail and front paws? Every time you erase shading, you're gonna want to smooth it out. ^^ 12:50, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded green shading is sometimes no but today is yes 23:14, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Very nice! 19:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but the light source is contradictory. The back/legs/most of it shows it coming like so, but the facial shading is on the wrong side. Whipped up an example of what I meant - green is where there should be no shading/light, blue is what should be shaded given the source, red is just the front legs which need their shading smoothed since it's too sharp from the last erasure, and the purple is the belly shading, which is leaking away from the lineart.

Reuploaded oh no what I have I done to this shading  00:07, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the belly is still leaking away from the lineart. Also, the added shading on the face and ears is much lighter than the rest and could stand to be darkened^^ Additionally, there's leaking shading on the bottom side of the tail, a new sharp erasure mark, and the light on the front legs could be defined with a smoother transition - it did solve the erasure mark issue, but was over blurred and removed the light that was present.

Reuploaded take 300 with purple shading  03:11, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Better^^ Define the shading depth on the front paws/legs and there's sharp erasure marks at the base of the tail

Reuploaded  19:35, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Still sharp there at the base of the tail, just where it meets the bum

Wait does this have the match the Alt TOEH? 22:14, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

It might have to but from the site, the pale gray was seen in sign of the moon for her toeh rank and her elder was cited for Outcast.  Ellie  life is an illusion 22:29, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

For some reason when I try to change the base she turns white. I'll reup momentarily. 01:36, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:42, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

The alts do need to match in color, we have historically matched alt sets to each other like this. If you need the file I can shoot it to you.

Reuploaded nope, I have the TOEH on a colorpick layer that I turn on/off  01:13, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste floating about. Earpink seems just slightly darker here; it's #b99193 on the toeh, and could also use some smoothing out. The eye colors here also don't match

Reuploaded ahh figured  22:28, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Troutclaw (E) - For Approval
I wanted a challenge! .. and anime hair. im only in it for thE HAIR. I referenced and colorpicked the star. i dont think i matched the stripes very great tho?? but if you have suggesstions on that please do ill probably fiddle with those tomorrow. i sure got that challenge. i think i can have this and flutterkit bc this is a redo? Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 02:07, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! The stripes appear a tad sharper/rugged on the star. Maybe try using a very small eraser and stroke horizontally on the edges? 12:17, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 12:39, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, will re-up soon as I can. I've finally almost got the stripes to a point I like them more. Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:52, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

reups i think this should match a bit nicer if I did it right. also sorry for delay next reups will be faster <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:41, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Remove the > most stripe on both front paws, the star/former set images show they never went that far down. The stripes are generally sharper in style and more disorderly on the star, as well.

Sorry if I'm talking a while to re-up I just got a laptop I've been setting up i just wanted to make sure that was said and known, I've been mainly focused on getting everything on that laptop ready and all my stuff on it. I'll see if I can't reupping tonight <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:08, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Reuploaded. I like the eye color of the apprentice pic more oof :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  13:19, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

What are the lighter blotches on her? Are those highlights? If so, tone them down (on the opacity bar). Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The pupils appear to be inconsistent in color- one eye has a darker black than the other. Shading is still leaking in some places. Don't worry! I struggle with that as well. Fill those blank areas with shading- I can provide a redline if you want. Smooth out the shading everywhere- just smooth out the edges with the blur or smudge tool, Gaussian Blur makes shading leak away, only use it if you want a really good shading gradient. You have unfilled pixels on > this side of the tail. Sorry for the wall of text! You're doing good so far! 22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Potato! <3 And thank you so much for the redline if you can provide!!! I feel so foolish… <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Here. Red= fill in/add shading. Blue= Remove shading to fit your light source. Green=Waste. Delete that. Yellow= missing/light pixels. Magenta= blur/smudge and tone down the highlights. Hope this helps! (if I mess up on the source sorry if I do). 22:31, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Aww thank you Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  03:40, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm it doesn't appear you did what I said. Did you reupload the right file? The only difference I see is that the highlight blotches are set to a higher opacity.. I meant to lower them, then blur/smudge. If you need any more help, let me know! 03:51, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof... maybe it's the .mpd file, I guess? :P Anyway :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

What is that on her belly? If that's shading depth you need to lighten it and blur/smudge it. Lighten the highlight spots on her legs more and then blur/smudge them. Smooth out the shading and make >> this pupil darker to match <<this pupil. Let me know if you need to elaborate! 13:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! :D School's so busy these days :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:46, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of brown in her eye and smooth the shading on her face.

Highlights are making her turn gray in some areas- if you haven't set them to overlay, you should as I think that should help. 01:35, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail please. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:08, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Harelight (W) ~ For Approval
my boy. all colors picked from apprentice

08:39, April 25, 2019

Can you smooth the tail shading? It looks like its going against the natural tail form on the top and it throws it off <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:41, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

maybe try expanding the fur texture over the haunch? it looks a bit blank, otherwise it’s super cute! 02:24, April 26, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

maybe smooth the lower haunch shading? Malina457 (talk) 03:38, April 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

There should also be a bit of shading curvingnover the top of the haunch. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:47, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups

11:08, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to repeat earlier comments, but can you please extend the texture more on the tail and hutch maybe? Looks like it's just the white of the blank and not finished. 03:15, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

the apprentice follows like this. --

I agree that it should be extended more, it looks a bit bare. I tried to put light texture on all the unshaded parts on the apprentice. 14:32, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Ah, okay.

17:17, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also still be smoothed and the haunch shading expanded as that's pretty thin. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:52, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

expand the texture a little more onto the right side of the face + the chest? it's hard to see it imo :P 22:36, April 27, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reups

04:13, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the back?

define the nosepink? Malina457 (talk) 04:37, May 1, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Dark Gray-and-Brown Warrior (W) ~ CBA
Mostly just an excuse to reuse Deerfoot's pattern. Comments? 23:01, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the tip of the shoulder patch into the gray more? If you're confused I can provide a redline. 23:10, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I understood what you meant. 23:21, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth and smooth the edges of it? Could you also add light to the chest. Even with this skurce there would still be light on the chest and legs <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:23, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smudge or blur the patches a bit? they look hard edged Malina457 (talk) 19:42, April 27, 2019 (UTC)malina

Smooth the haunch shading a touch?

Reuploaded. Made quite few changes. 22:45, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:55, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Hollyflower (E) ~ For Approval
mega hollyflower

09:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading, and define it on the white? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:00, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also extend the white on the tail (or at least one part of it) to reach the end of the tail? 20:07, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 04:16, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

The white on the too doesn't seem to be showing? She's suppose to have it I beleive. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:20, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry but what is the 'too'? 12:49, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe the white on the tail? I can't get what Mink's talking about either.. 15:15, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

It is definitely the tail, the white looks very gray there Malina457 (talk) 15:51, April 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

The tail white on the underside could stand to be smudged out with slightly longer strokes, I think, to match the queen's styling

I was talking about the white on the tail, my phone autocorrected. The star shows it on the top and bottom of the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:07, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

the queen shows it in the same way, the white is very gray due to the shading and i dont think i can do anything about it. 09:54, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe you could try adding some highlights on the white of the tail to lighten it a bit? Or you could make a separate shading layer and put the tail shading on that and set it too a low opacity, so there is shading, but it doesn't make it appear too gray. 03:02, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

reups 13:23, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

I still think the white on the tail should be smudged more, longer strokes instead of short ones just back and forth; the queen shows it feathering out

Dark Brown Kit (K) ~ For Approval
I hope I named this right... -Shadow  hOnK :o)  22:53, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and smooth out the shading. I think the name is correct but with these guys it doesn't matter until after the image is approved. 23:01, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  14:17, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? 12:19, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Tabby WindClan Warrior (W)- For Approval
Comments? Now presenting the Daisy/Sandstorm clone with lovely pointed tabby stripes. 23:06, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

This might be personal preference (since I normally try realism with tabbies lol) but maybe add a couple more stripes to the legs? If not that's all good. I think some depth could be added to the shading tho <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:24, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

I forgot one thing, normally when it comes too pointed tabbies they also have stripes on their faces so maybe add some there too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:28, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oh it's fine Mink. There are stripes on the face. Did you look closely? 23:28, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

I can't see them at all <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:30, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

I see them, but they could stand to be defined. Also, you've got waste along the right ear. Besides that, could you smoothen out the eye depth? 23:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded just ran the burn tool over them, that should do it. Some on the << this side of the face are hidden by shading, so they'll be kinda hard to see. Man, I'm pretty proud of my tabby M. 03:19, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing Potato, I love these colours! Could you possibly add some shading to the top of the haunch, in that belly space there? And if the light source is coming from ->, maybe remove the shading from that side of the front legs too?

Reuploaded Thank you Diablo! 04:16, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink a bit more? 12:18, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the <-- front leg and on the stomach (that area in between the elbow and the hind leg lol) - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  13:00, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I spy with my little eye a shading redo coming  22:20, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

I wouldn't say you need to redo it... perhaps smooth it out along the back. I'm also not sure if this is my eyes or not, but I think it might be leaking along the spine as well. ​​

Reuploaded ah phew that's a relief  22:57, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Nice! Could you smooth the shading on the back? 03:03, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:09, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry but the character you are making this charart for has no known rank so cannot be given a blank. You can either have this image for a different character (who does have a rank), or have this rejected.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:01, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Sorry for uploading it the last time, I keep forgetting about the one "new" image rule. All colors taken from her ultimate guide pic of course - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:12, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

She's so blue (get the song reference?). Can you define the eye depth just a tad? 23:15, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

i have to ask but what is this alt even for? shes a dark grey tabby like her desc states. 23:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Alt for The Ultimate Guide. 23:22, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

thats what i meant. shes dark grey tabby there. it doesnt go against anything. 23:25, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Last I knew on the alt's discussed for her she wasn't suppose to get an alt coz she was shown as a short hair ans the artists choice gave her longhair. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:25, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

fur length alone hasnt been a valid thing unless theres some other mistake, so i may have to lean towards declining it unfortunatwly. its also not in her mistakes section. 23:27, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

We voted on having one this, even just for the fur length and slightly differing colors. It'd have to go through the forum to revoke that decision since that consensus still stands for now, so for now it's valid until/if that goes through

If it's fur length why would it get an alt? Why not just tweak the other images to be short hair if that's the issue? As from what i see of the image, there isn't really that much of a difference color wise. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:33, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

not really since it goes againstthe requirements for an image alt to be valid anyway. this shoukdve been declined jsut based off that alone. that and she isnt named for it either. 23:34, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

The vote passed though. You'd have to bring it up again if you don't agree it's valid.

Do I still work on this then, or do I wait? I assume I'd have to wait for the results of the voting if it happens. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:52, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

The vote passed. So technically it's valid unless someone brings it up on the vote again and it's deemed not valid there.

but if its againat the actual rules of the project itself, it shouldnt be here regardless, even with a vote. jose, its up to you if you want to continue it or not. its not a slight against you, just the fact this image shouldnt actually be considered valid. 02:10, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry I meant if there was going to be a new voting. Also I completely understand, no worries. If this image shouldn't be valid in the first place then I don't see the point in continuing with it. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:23, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Some argued that it wasn't valid, back when it was voted on, and the majority that timesaid it was valid. To reverse that we do need to bring it back up again and have a trail, because wiki-wide policy is of following consensus. The vote had been split because some people disagreed, but that is up to the voters, as everything 'round is; we can't auto-decline with a vote that says otherwise still in place. If it's truly invalid, the next vote would pass easily enough.

isnt the alt for the fact that shes not dappled? but regardless, can you define the shading on the chest? 02:37, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

And just saying, but there's no rule in the guidelines saying that you can't have an alt based on fur length.

can you darken the shading, the aqua colored shading throws it off a lil <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:05, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

i made the vote, and posted it. the main reason for me was the "length" but the others who voted it to pass said the colors looked off too. there's no reason for a vote to pass but revoking it later.

04:20, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Well.. for me she looks midtone blue with black stripes and shorthair.. I kinda am split as to whether or not the image should count. 16:26, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:32, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot about the chest comment - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:37, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

It was already voted to count Greenflower and im pretty sure its supposed to be that blue Malina457 (talk) 19:51, April 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

I was talking about the difference between her regular images and this one, and I know the nom passed. 21:19, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Shade Pelt (H) - for approval
i hate inductors.ihate lc and rl ewewewe 15:27, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

I must say, I was not expecting this approach to this pattern, well done! Maybe define the shading? Malina457 (talk) 15:48, April 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

man i was tired. reup still hate inductors tho 22:52, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

can you expand the shading on the legs and define the shading there as well? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:02, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading please, I can't see it too well. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:13, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup i really cant darken it anymore 01:20, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the color of the shading then? Also there's waste next to the underbelly and tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:03, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

tbh I can see the shading ok. Any darker and it'll look weird on this color. To also note she used pure black so she can't darken the color anymore either

Could you expand the leg shading? I'm not seeing that it was expanded. That farthest forleg is fine for shading but the forepaw there needs shading and the back ones cohld be expanded. Hopefully that clarified lol <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:04, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

im sorry but i honestly think that with this light source, basically all of the paws would be in light except for places that are directly blocked from the light. i already did expand it on the front legs as much as the light source would allow, but i honestly think that if i expanded the shading it 1) wouldnt look good and 2) wouldnt match the light source. a couple of cats have pretty thin shading on their legs/paws here and many of my starclan cats 07:28, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed with burnt. Only touch of shading I'd like to see is on the back foremost leg, as it looks slightly broken so could you possibly see if that can be adjusted in anyway? :D Absolutely stunning piece. 09:23, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup ill get rid of the waste later 10:16, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Dull down the white on the face a bit? 12:16, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup 23:09, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

If this is supposed to be dappled brown, why does it seem more like a tabby? I can't even tell what are dapples and what isn't. Is there any way you could tweak this so it fits the description better?

My comment just got lost in the argument, so I'm gonna bring it back down again, just in case you missed it. There is waste everywhere around the charart. -- 01:33, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reup shes supposed to be a bengal brown spotted cat. i made the mottles denser and more round to make it more obvious 04:43, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

I love this design, though I think there's some color leaking out of the bottom foot here. 04:50, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reup 05:18, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Thriftpaw (A) - CBA
\o/ 18:47, April 28, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Base needs to be #332933, ears need to be #ab8c96, and eyes are #e1ff85. Looks like this has texture too? there shouldn't be any, I just used highlights for the areas where light would be hitting it (believe i used white for that) 22:51, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded my bad, i didn't know there was already a kit sprite. i left a very faint texture on it since i thought it matched the kit sprite a little better 23:30, April 28, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 12:24, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Hold up, why does this still have a texture? Patch outright said that there wasn't one on the kit, and she's the OA of it. ​​​​​

i left the texture on because even if the kit sprite didn't have texture applied to it it still looks faintly textured, more so than the apprentice sprite, so i left it on very low opacity. i can totally remove it if you really want, it just looked a little odd without it  23:26, April 30, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded i just went and removed the texture anyway 00:20, May 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Re-CBA? This looks lovely^^ 02:51, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Ivytail (RC) (E) ~ For Approval
i had a little trouble with this one.. but i think i fixed everything i noticed that was wrong! 22:05, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the eye depth? 22:47, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

i'm a lil confused as to where the light source is on this, could you make that a little more clear if you can? this is super cute though! 23:56, April 28, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading depth. 22:00, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 22:05, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth more. The image looks kinda on the flat side right now, but that can be easily fixed! 22:21, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

oh frick i saved it with the shading layer off.. welp here is what i meant to do! re-uploaded! 22:27, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Could you reupload under File:Ivytail (RC).elder.png instead of what you have? The templates are case-sensitive and everything needs to match. ​​

oof sorry! Renamed! 01:17, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Nope, not quite. All you need to do is put a space before (RC). 02:08, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

yikes i managed to mess up twice.. I believe its fixed now! 14:05, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

can you connect the shading on the lower haunch to the lineart on the tail? <span style="">04:55 Wed May 1

Re-Uploaded! 18:51, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, I think the shading could stand to extend to cover the muzzle

Fallowtail (E) - CBA
A soft girl  00:39, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading just a bit on the front legs? 12:10, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a little and also the shading on the > ear?

Reup  23:48, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Whitewater (E) - CBA
Blindness is my love. 04:52, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

the shading needs defined and expanded, the eye depth could be defined too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:04, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail and shoulder, it's very hard edged 06:59, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 07:12, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 07:36, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading on the bottom of the chest, haunch, and tip of the tail. This is very good! 12:09, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Brighten her up, this doesn’t look white. ​​​​

Reuploaded - I was told to darken her up, and despite my fears she'd turn grey I did so anyway. I've lightened her back down to my personal preference =) Also hopefully fixed the leaking. Not positive on that meaning but if I haven't covered it please let me know and point me in the right direction! 00:30, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Wait, what? She's white, why would she need darkened? Regardless, the warrior and elder versions that were previously there used pure white as their base (I did them, hence why I know), so I don't see why this shouldn't match. An image being redone does not mean the other versions should be disregarded. ​​​

Reuploaded - Oh! I didn't know the base was pure white. I tried to match as best as possible but I was told to divert from that. I colour picked but didn't have the file so I had to wing it. Adjusted the base to pure white so hopefully, this helps! 00:39, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

As the one who said to darken, I never said anything about rhe base just that it was hard for me to see the shading and thought that could be darkened a small bit. Also I'm not really seeing ear pink <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:31, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 02:53, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the ears? Also, could you add a pale eye color/define what's there? We usually don't leave them as white or close to, even if the actual color isn't specified, we just pick one. It doesn't have to be much, just something that isn't white

the cat is blind though? Malina457 (talk) 23:46, April 30, 2019 (UTC)malina

Even our blind cats, Jayfeather, Rock (Healer), and Longtail, have some form of pale eye color.

Reuploaded - I colourpicked from the OA's work. But I have added a tinge more brown. 00:05, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Plumstone (W) - CBA
i tried. Patchfeather, how'd you do your patches on the app? I just smudged them with a really small brush at a high strength 06:34, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

This is super cute!!! there’s some residue up by the left ear but otherwise i love it! 16:25, April 29, 2019 (UTC)Tubaxel

Very very pretty! I made the patches by using the paintbrush tool with the size at 1 pixel. To make them blend more, I used the same tool as before with the opacity lowered... maybe around 60-70 or so? I used black and went over the edges of the ginger until it looked pretty blended. I'd offer the file, but I was an idiot and put pretty much everything all on one layer, so it's probably useless. 17:01, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:51, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:52, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Talon (E) - CBA
03:50, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

could you define shading just a smidge - it might just be this screen im using rn

Re-uploaded 05:36, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Tornear (E) ~ For Approval
If the OA of the star can send me a psd file (and also tell my how you did the stripes??) then that would be great! If that's not possible, color codes would be good enough. Tinystream (talk) 21:59, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are more bunched together and greater in number <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:49, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

this actually matches really really well lol. id only say make the stripes thicker and softer. i would offer you the file but i really dont think you need it 23:16, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Mottled brown warrior (W) ~ For Approval
welp hope i named this correctly  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:51, 4/30/2019> ​

You have waste near the bend of the tail. 00:26, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pinks seem to be separate colors? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:10, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

re-up  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <01:15, 5/01/2019> ​

There's some waste in between the feet- let me know if you need a redline. 01:32, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading in the ---> ear? 12:37, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Muscled tabby (DF) ~ For Approval
00:45, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Black River Clan Warrior ~ For Approval
Been a while, eh? Anyway, i love this blank Malina457 (talk) 01:47, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina Define the earpink and smooth out the shading. It could also be expanded on the tail. The heading is missing "For Approval" as well. 02:37, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 02:44, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

this is like...REALLY black lol, is there any way u could lighten the color to see the lineart/shading better? 16:57, May 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Not going to ignore your comment, but, this is just as dark as all my other black cats, so may I ask for a second opinion?? Malina457 (talk) 17:26, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

I don't wanna be rude, but it is kinda hard for me to see the lineart.. 18:54, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

I too cannot see the lineart. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  21:48, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

According to the guidelines (I think), seeing the lineart is not mandatory. However, I do agree this needs to be lightened as I cannot make out any lineart or the shading. 22:05, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

No no, you aren't being rude, thanks for additional input i'll lighten it right away! Malina457 (talk) 22:37, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

Could you also define the eye depth? -- 22:41, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups for base, ill get to eyes later Malina457 (talk) 22:43, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups for all this time Malina457 (talk) 22:52, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

Light Colored TC Kit - For Approval
cute <span style="">04:52 Wed May 1

could you smooth the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:12, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">19:54 Wed May 1

Can you define the light source? And I don't think the shading by the eye should be there, or it should at least be reduced. -- 22:41, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Dawncloud (E) ~ For Approval
wassup