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Sandstorm (Alt W) ~ For Approval
She looks like she has blue eyes in the picture. Kind of like this one. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:24, 12/24/2018 ]

Reuploaded Made the texture more visible. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:29, 12/24/2018 ]

Can you lighten the haunch shading a bit? And I’m not exactly sure what your light source is. 13:42, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded when you put shading on the lineart layer Hope this makes a difference? the tail shading was ruining the light source. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:51, 12/24/2018 ]

The shading looks lke it's leaking way from the lineart on the back a smidge Malina457 (talk) 14:59, December 24, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define the shading on the right front leg--Potato Flakin (talk) 15:55, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, define the shading on all the legs 17:32, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink a bit! :) 20:12, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Silverfur   skz  [ 03:17, 12/25/2018 ]

Define the light on the legs.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:35, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

'''Reups. Silverfur  skz  [ 04:15, 12/25/2018 ] '''

This color doesn't quite look like it matches the image color very well. Is that where you got this color from?

I got it from the starclan one, but i'll change it. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:07, 12/25/2018 ]

Understandable, but I think in this case, it should match the field guide images that it's meant to depict. You didn't do anything wrong, I just think it was a miscommunication as to what image you should get coloring from. ​​​​​​

Reups! Does it look better? -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:10, 12/25/2018 ]

She needs to be a lot more orange, just like the image from The Ultimate Guide/Cats of the Clans. If you need to, I can help you get an appropriate color. ​​​​​

I colorpicked from her head/neck. Wait i'm gonna reup and if it doesn't look good then you could help. Silverfur  skz  [ 11:41, 12/25/2018 ]

Reups The color looks unnatural imo. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 11:42, 12/25/2018 ]

It has to match what we're given, unnatural or not. She's still not looking orange enough.... I'll see what I can do, but given the lighting and how these are painted, it might not be possible to get a good pixel to pick from. ​​​

Humor me and see what #D9994A looks like. I saw where you colorpicked from the head, and I'm thinking there's a lot of light there in general. ​​​

Looks a bit golden yellow in #D9994A. Let's see how it looks  Silverfur   skz  [ 11:52, 12/25/2018 ]

Reups Looks okay I guess. Silverfur  skz  [ 11:54, 12/25/2018 ]

I think it also might be your shading color...each pixel in her image is a totally different color, making picking extremely difficult. Leave it like this for now, and if someone else comes along with a better alternative that still looks ginger, then go ahead and change it....her art doesn't really show her as pale, but more of a neutral ginger coloring. ​​​​​​​

Define the earpink a bit, and --> hind leg shading is receding away from the lineart.​ Also smooth the shading out on --> hind leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:21, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Oops I forgot something- Define the tail shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:24, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the < side of the haunch 03:38, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups  Silverfur   skz  [ 04:20, 12/26/2018

Define the light on the tail and lower the opacity of the shading a bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 05:58, December 26, 2018 (UTC)

reups   𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [ ]

Hmm... disregard this if you are the OA of the set, but I don't think the pelt colour matches the queen. Or vice versa, unsure of which one will be considered the first in set, but the colours should stay consistent to match. —​​​​​

Realized yours is first in set, nvm. —​​​​​

Reups Fixed some issues -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [09:03, 12/27/2018 ]

Shrink the earpink it a lil' bit. There's also waste outside --> this front leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 06:17, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [12:14, 12/28/2018 ]

Reups I uploaded the wrong file and apparently had 2 clones and couldnt find out which one i had done the reup on. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [12:40, 12/28/2018 ]

the shading seems too sharp on the flank, smooth it a bit. Also it seems the shading is leaking from the back lineart slightly.

14:10, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.--Potato Flakin (talk) 14:27, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the < front leg, and add some shading on the part of the back where it meets the tail

Smooth out the haunch shading. —​​​​​​​​​​​​

There's too much shading on the hind leg closest to us, around the end of the leg and near no shading on the paw. This is looking good still! SquidwardPlays 20:21, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups..  𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [05:50, 12/29/2018 ]

Smooth out the shading some more. 09:06, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reups. This is harder than I thought -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [00:59, 12/30/2018 ]

It always is when you’re getting used to it. But you’re doing so well! I love this. The shading is still leaking away from the back lineart, though. 05:00, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Redline? 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣  𝓼𝓴𝔃  [06:08, 12/30/2018 ]

Reupssssss I think the 'shading thats leaking' could be the white texture that makes it look like its leaking away. I hid the lineart and i found nothing. 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣  𝓼𝓴𝔃  [06:12, 12/30/2018 ]

Reups Some waste. 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣  𝓼𝓴𝔃  [07:48, 12/30/2018 ]

SHould there be shading on the stomach, because currently it looks like there is none Malina457 (talk) 15:29, December 30, 2018 (UTC)Malina

You don't have to, but maybe try tinting the shading a warm tone? It might help with the problems it's giving you (: 16:39 Sun Dec 30

I also think it wouldn't hurt if you smoothed out the shading a little more in the neck area specifically. 18:09, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Reup I need more time as i'm rushing to get this done -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [02:19, 12/31/2018 ]

You still have plenty of time (: smooth the shading on the neck and main body. It should be like a gradient 02:23 Mon Dec 31

Don't rush! Since you're still an apprentice, you have ten days to upload your next re-upload and until 24 January to get the charart done. So that's plenty of time, given your diligent streak so far. And you're improving with every upload! It's okay. Take a deep breath. Step away for a bit if needed. You're doing great. :) 02:28, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reup Hmmm, does this look good? I know I messed up on the tail a little bit. 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [02:30, 12/31/2018 ]

Hmm in comparison with the alt. queen, the base and earpink on this seem slightly darker; could you check that? The shading could also be darkened just there on the rump, around the area where it meets the tail, it's lighter than the rest

To-Be Blanks ~ For Approval
Alrighty let's do this. I'm only gonna post one at a time for my sanity sorry ;u; 01:03, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Please do not apologize for posting one at a time, it is obviously going to be stressful if you do two, so do not overwork yourself. Not sure if this makes any sense, but the blanks look a tad crooked. I am not really sure how to explain it though... does anyone else know how to? 01:07, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Nice! Could you make these a bit bigger? They’re small, not much bigger than the kits, and lots of us want those bigger. Not too much, just maybe apprentice size? :) 01:10, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I think I know what could help the crookedness. The stomachs right now look really unnaturally flat. Their chest (rib cage more specifically) is supposed to stoop a little lower than the stomach. If you need me to, I can highlight an example. 01:14, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Another thing, the pose is a bit stiff and rigid. I know this was the original pose, but it is almost unnaturally rigid with how the joints are positioned. 01:17 Thu Dec 27

Reups Took longer that I thought, but how's that size wise? @Sun, I'm honestly not sure how to address your concern. And @everyone, any red lines you are willing to provide, please go ahead! ^^ 02:42, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make a small line for a mouth, kinda like the deputy blank? :) 02:47, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Round the ears a tad and the floof on the longhair looks flat. Curve the lineart to flow with the floof if ya get what I mean.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:18, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

I'll do a skeleton thing when I get home. It's an easy fix, actually. 13:44 Thu Dec 27

http://i63.tinypic.com/2en6gqe.png Here we go. The red is muscles/mass, the blue is the skeleton. 17:15 Thu Dec 27

Reups Thanks Sun! 19:19, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

can you shorten the neck a little? it looks to long.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:33, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 23:27, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

the paws look slightly too big for the legs.

23:57, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

the necks still look to long, I. will try to get a refrence to how long I think, but I am on my brothers computer currently. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:13, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Idk if it’s just me, but the head looks a little small for the body. 19:20, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Nope Winter you're not alone. Round the shorthair's chest a bit more?Potato Flakin (talk) 19:58, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

What do you mean by round? 20:07, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry if this is overstepping ;; Um.. I made a redline (for better view) and my anatomy might be a bit off but I couldn't find the words to describe any of this skjdksdjds. —​​​​​​​​

Vec you need to raise the booty to match the height of the shoulder Gotcha thanks for the red line! This really helps. 20:23, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups These are slowly getting better imo. 21:00, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Minor things. 02:20, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

redline for neck.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 06:16, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the eyes a tiny bit bigger? :) 06:34, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I absolutely love how these are turning out. I made a red line of the shorthair showing things that I think could be improved. The ear closest to us needs some sort of line separating the back of the ear from the inside of the ear, and I personally think the shoulder and jawline are too round (but this is optional.) The front leg comes up at an awkward angle when it meets the body, and I think this could be improved by doing something similar to what my redline shows. The chest on the short hair could be a little rounder too (the long hair's chest is fine! 14:48, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the redlines! @Hawkey, I tried doing what you suggested for the leg, but it ended up looking too blocky and big and I wasn't happy with it. I tried tweaking what you gave me, so hopefully I still obtained what you were asking for! And could I have a second opinion about the neck length? I've been shortening it just about every upload and I'm worried if I shorten it again, then there wouldn't be any left. 17:28, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I personally think the necks look fine! Also I’m glad you found the red line helpful, and no worries, I didn’t expect you to follow the red line exactly since you’re the artist here!! :-) 17:34, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

This is kinda minor, but the chest seems to stoop sharply down to the arms (if that makes sense). Can you make the bend a little rounder? I can circle it if you want. 04:29, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, please if you don't mind! I...honestly do better with visuals for blanks. And is that for both of them or just one? 04:31, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry if this is extremely picky. Just that line there - and just the short hair, not the long hair. 04:35, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Reups How's that? 04:50, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

These are looking sooooo good — just about there! :) You are doing amazing, Vec. Alright, this might be picky, but can you make the eyes just a bit more almond-shaped? Sorta like the Warrior, but bigger (this size is perfect). 04:59, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

These are looking great, man! Maybe round the eartips a tiny bit? You don't have to though 16:40 Sun Dec 30

Reups Meant to upload these sooner. 20:58, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

I don't know if it's the style but the chest/stomach seem really low but the butt of the cat seems higher up? 00:18, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

I think that it looks fine. 00:21, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Onestar (Alt W) ~ For Evaluation
Should match his description from TUG CloudymoonTheCat

Hm, might just be me or the coloring, but the shading along the lineart seems to be leaking pretty much everywhere.

15:34, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

You did the stripes amazingly! But, Define shading all over except for the tail. And since you're still a kit iirc, until a kit is promoted to apprentice it should be For Evaluation, but correct me if I'm wrong. SquidwardPlays 15:50, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

On the topic of shading, is it tinted? Tinting it with a color might help me see it better. Potato Flakin (talk) 16:16, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

It would be 'For Evaluation', yes. Also, make the stripes thinner and add more of them, per the leader alt it needs to match

There needs to be more white in between the light brown. The leader alt also appears to not have any dark brown on it, so remove that. I forgot to say this is lovely Cloudymoon!Potato Flakin (talk) 19:29, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

In 'dark brown' do you mean the stripes or the base colour? Because he Have dark stripes if you zoom in CloudymoonTheCat

Lemme rephrase that- lighten them, they are way darker that the leader. I meant the stripes.--Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, December 27, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the pale parts to match the leader and make the tail become lighter as it approaches the tail tip. 14:39, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I re-uploaded it - I tried to define the shading, and I changed the base colour and the stripes and swirls. CloudymoonTheCat

You're getting there! Warm the brown (lighten it) a bit more to match the leader, which I'll link here. Can you also whiten the white parts? They look cream.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The overblurred look on this image may be a result of putting everything on the same layer. Are you using multiple layers?

I do use multiply layers. I'll try to fix everything that you said :) CloudymoonTheCat

Try using pure white?

Define tail shading. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [07:09, 12/30/2018 ]

Re-uploaded it again <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Uh Oh! It appears you alligned the image. Make sure when you reupload remove the "|left|". Can you dethumb this real quick?Potato Flakin (talk) 14:40, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

nah they just thumbnailed it. make sure not to upload them as a thumbnail. I've removed it for you, but keep that in mind when uploading more chararts. The stripes also taper more, and they aren't as thick and blurry as they are here. (sorry if that seemed rude) Taper out the stripes, and maybe smudge them. Expand the shading as well, and smooth it out.

Windstar (Alt. Ro) ~ Declined
All colors from alt leader. Comments? 03:11, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

The facial markings seem.. Bolder and like there's more there than in the leader, if that makes sense? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:23, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:25, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth the belly shading some?

Reuploaded. 00:18, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Coolios, CBA?

I hate to be that person, but while I was doing Windstar's summary and re-reading her bio from the Ultimate Guide, she's not explicitly called a rogue by name. She's referred to as a loner before joining the mountain cats. 20:38, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah rip just checked that as well. Declined due to that, sorry^^

Littlecloud(mc alt 2)~for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​​​​​​​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to  the  alt  mentioned  above  by  Echo, this  would  have  to  be  renamed  '' File:Littlecloud. mc. alt2. png ''. Mind fixing  that  real  quick  Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^

17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The darker stripes on the face should be thinner, and all of the stripes should be more jagged^^ There's also a slight layer of texture going underneath them, on the mca ~

Define your light source. Its pretty hard to distinguish it. If you need help with it, you may find the Apprentice Tutorials helpful. <span style="">16:43 Sun Dec 30

Boulder (Warrior Alt 2) ~ For Approval
here he is, I love this sides design. I'll fix the shading in my next upload so try to refrain from commenting on that please. 20:13, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

This is great! But would you mind shrinking the earpink? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 20:15, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Don't forget some of the paler parts on his face and such. The elder is the first in this set I believe if that's not being redone (can't remember). 20:16, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I've used ear pink like this before, if you could explain what you mean so I'm sure I know what you mean before saying I'd like to keep to like this. I'll do the pale on my next upload. I just needed to get this up. 20:17, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste at the top of the ear. (Im on mobile otherwise I'd redline;;) —​​

Hereis a reference for the waste that Echo mentioned. (first link, you may need to zoom in)Potato Flakin (talk) 01:30, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Please smooth out the shading, maybe lighten it a tad. 01:51, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I know to smooth it out, I ask that nobody comment on the shading until the next upload please. 01:54, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think the stripes are slightly thicker on the elder overall, and have a more blurred effect. I know this is a different side, but the style has to match.

I know the style has to match, that's what I was going for. I'll thicken some of the chest but I think it's okay that a few are thinner. From what I saw on the elder, they looked smudged. I could be wrong though. 07:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The elder has some white on the chest and face. That needs to apply here as well. 14:37, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, also if one user already comments on something could you refrain from commenting on it until the next upload please. 21:00, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Mink, calm down. It's possibly that the other comments weren't seen, and that kind of attitude borders on acting like a lead. ​​​

I wasn't trying to act like a lead. I do apologize that it came off that way. 23:13, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Expand the shading? <span style="">02:21 Mon Dec 31

the stripes look oddly green to me. 06:47, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Sun, could you possibly explain where needs expanded. Trolly, the stripes were colorpickes from his official art so they aren't green. It could be the shading or the screen. I can throw out the hex I used for the stripes though. 06:56, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Skt's right. I see greenish stripes too.Potato Flakin (talk) 14:11, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Main body and haunch. <span style="">17:10 Mon Dec 31

If you could expand the neck shading a little as well, that'd be great^^

I colorpicked from the photo on the stripes, I'll do the shading on my next upload. 23:29, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

The hex for the stripes are 2a3e3f, it was colorpicked from his official image. Spooky also told me in Discord that since both this and his official art are slightly green. It'd stay as is. 23:53, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Littlecloud (Alt K) ~ CBA
all stuffs from alt mca

when can I cba things? oh! somthing wrong? the shading looks to dark, but I think that is all the problems! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 06:28, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Owlbite, you can only CBA when your the project lead. The shading looks fine to me. 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣  𝓼𝓴𝔃  [07:36, 12/29/2018 ]


 * . ;~; . it looks black on the tail. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 17 24, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded black? o.O I'm using a red tint

I don’t see any black — I think the tail shading looks fine. :) 05:01, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

I ment the shading looks black, and on the body to, still<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 09:04, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Not sure what you mean, but since others can’t seem to see it, I’d like to keep it as is.

Owlbite, people have used this opacity of shading on images before, I think the shading is good Spooky.Potato Flakin (talk) 14:44, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is honestly perfect imo. Could you define the stripes on the legs a bit? They're a bit more noticeable on the official artwork and apprentice. 19:33, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks!

Comments before approval? 03:22, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt Q) ~ CBA
when you try your best but you don't succeed

Stunning, Fox. Could you define shading/increase opacity of shading? I can't see it well. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣   𝓼𝓴𝔃  [07:37, 12/29/2018 ]

Re-uploaded thanks. is this any better?

Specks of waste around both hindlegs and foreleg furthest from us as well as base of tail and the back. This is great but another thing, the Deputy and warrior both had texture, and it was more apparent than it is here on the other two mentioned from what I can tell. If you disagree then definitely leave it, but otherwise try to add texture if there is none or define it if there is, I can't tell. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 14:32, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

For Reference to Squid's comment on the waste #1, reference two here .Potato Flakin (talk) 16:12, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

There's also one long stripe coming from each eye to the forehead 16:38, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The file was helpful! thanks Vec. Is this better now?

Np! Can you add just a flash of white beneath the eyes? 17:44, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure if I added too much

CBA?

Graystripe (Alt D) - For Approval
08:17, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

I know it might be hard, but can you define the light on the tail? Also, can you define the shading depth on all the shading of the front half of the image? Front legs, neck, and head, mainly, but not the flank or haunch or back leg shading—that’s all fine. If possible, could you define the earpink? It’s fine if you can’t. Nice work, Icy! :) 08:28, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thank you. 08:39, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

There's a dot of waste near the tail.Potato Flakin (talk) 14:46, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Could you possibly smooth, maybe thin out the stomach shading some. it seems really blocky/blotchy. 21:01, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

The stomach shading looks fine to me; if she smooths this out, I'm afraid it'll lose the definition it has. ​​​

I think it could be smoothed but it's up to Icy on that part, that and the light source could be defined as I can't really tell where that's coming from. 00:25, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the light source just fine... 00:46, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Agreed, I can distinguish it fine. 00:51, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Also, Potato, I am not sure what you are talking about. I see no waste, even when I clear all of it out. 02:34, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

About the light source: the haunch tells me the light source is coming from ->, but the front leg tells me it's coming from <-. I agree it's confusing. Swap the back leg (closest to us) shading.

The light source on the tail could also be defined. 06:58, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Can you darken or define the ear pink? It might just be my screen, but that color pink kind of blends into the gray. ^^ 17:14, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

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20:51, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

This looks great Thunder! Smooth out the tail shading a bit, add some to the hind leg furthest from us, and define the shading depth over all some. 20:57, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Could you also define the body shading, I'm finding it a tad hard to see. 21:02, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate shading, not my strong suit in charart. 21:17, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

Add some light on the > front leg and the back paw furthest from us, if you would^^

Reuploaded 23:40, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking away from the tail a bit. 02:30, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:22, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

If you could darken the shading a little, that'd be great^^ I also think it still may be leaking away from the lineart on the tail; could you check that? The shading could be defined a little on back paws, and the light defined on the topmost ear (from out view) and the > front leg. Looks great so far :3

Reuploaded 00:03, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

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Another one, Squid? Why, yes, Because I have too much fun making charart! Can't stop and won't stop uwu. I like this one, I'm just not completely sure if the longhair blank was the right one. I'll change it to short if needed. All colors picked from the image File:Firestar.GA2.png <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:46, December 30, 2018 (UTC)

He seems to be shown as a shorthair, so I'd say use the shorthair blank. 00:17, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I did it, but when I went in to convert to short, some things had seemed to have gotten messed up and/or deleted, being the muzzle color, earpink, and shading, so i redid those things too. The new shading might be a bit light, but I'll fix it in a bit. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:47, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Would you define the light on the tail, when you do go to fix the shading. 00:57, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

There's some weird black line beneath his feet.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:24, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Along with Potato's comment, the chest fur looks weird to me. 𝕊𝕚𝕝   𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 06:53, 12/31/2018 ]

Shouldn't he have a slightly defined paler muzzle? Malina457 (talk) 15:45, December 31, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you define the light on the < front leg? There'd be a little more with that source, I'd think

Define the earpink a bit more, it blends in with the pelt.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:24, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Reups To be honest, I hated it when I changed ti to shorthair,so I redid it completely and I like it more now. Re-colorpicked from the image best i could. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:05, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

It might be just me but the eyes seem a tad crosseyed. 00:17, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. There's been several leader images with that pixel placement. Could you define the light on the front legs and <--- haunch? 01:58, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

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Not too keen on the colors, will go and fix when I'm more awake. Don't comment on that or the shading, as I'm aware both need to be tweaked. Also wasn't sure if I was allowed to expand the pale parts onto the rest of his chest and wherever else we're typically allowed to on tabbies... so I can remove them if need be. I also am aware of the lack of shading on the feet; I forgot when I uploaded. ​

Could you possibly define the ear pink on the --> ear? 07:00, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

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if I need to darken this let me know

There's an out-of-place pixel on the tail tip that should be filled in. This is lovely, and also thanks for giving me advice on PB; it was really helpful!Potato Flakin (talk) 19:35, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

re-up you're welcome :)

the base coat should be much darker. 20:55, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

re-up like so?

Maybe a touch lighter? It's close, but the FG almost seems like a very dark smoky gray color

re-up 'my dog speaks more eloquently than thee'

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If it needs the tailtip and paws to be black, let me know. <span style="">19:59 Mon Dec 31

It might just be my eyes or something but she looks cross-eyed.

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23:06, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink seems oddly two-toned.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:26, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Might just be the shading, Potato. Also the earpink on the queen seems more saturated.

'reuploaded it's just the shading ^^'

23:35, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

I think the earpink on both, the left could be darkened a tad and the right could be lightened just a smidge. 23:37, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Just ignore that, you uploaded when I commented lol 23:37, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add a smidge of shading on the bottoms of the paws? Just slightly

could you add some shading to the <-- ear with your light source there would be some shading at the top of the left ear. 23:39, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

reuploaded

23:42, December 31, 2018 (UTC)

She has lighter marks around her eyes. They are just a midtone gray beneath the texture. <span style="">00:52 Tue Jan 1

reuploaded

01:33, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is part of the design, but there are a few black pixels on the chin that seem out of place. 01:49, January 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 02:00, January 1, 2019 (UTC)