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Plumwillow (Alt W 2) - For Approval
Matched colors/stripe style to manga. -- 23:10, October 30, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes end in a point? 00:42, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 01:12, October 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:54, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

I realize you're trying to copy what's shown here, but could you possibly make them slightly more solidified? As they are, it looks just like random scribbles. However, in the panel below what's shown in the image on her article, the stripe that we can see appears to be more like a stripe and not as scribbly. I have the same issue with this one..., the stripes really should not be as scribbled on as they are and a bit more uniform. ​​​​​

Reuploaded -- 00:19, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you taper the stripes more to a point as well?

Gonna make the argument that perhaps this is what you should be aiming for - scribbled, yet solid, because I concur with skye, but we also need to match the image. That's her one for this from the german wwiki (mine) btw.

Reuploaded There are some days where I can't stripe.. -- 15:36, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes end in a point? 04:08, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mother..knows..best Oops, this is what happens when you hear Tangled in the background when making art. -- 04:15, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add another strike? In the manga picture, there appears to be four distinct stripes.

Reuploaded I have now striked a stripe. -- 16:24, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the earpink up? Or desaturate it a little, its very red to me

Reuploaded -- 00:25, November 6, 2019 (UTC)

Flamepaw (TC) (Apprentice) - For Approval
this guy is my son now 01:27, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you dull the highlight (?) lighter texture a bit; they seem to overtake the base and making the image lighter overall than the kit. The eyes also appear more amber/saturated on the kit as well. 02:53, November 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded the eye color was colorpicked from the kit image, i dont know why the wiki is dulling it...i tried to fix it a little bit : ( 03:55, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Would you like the file for him if wikia keeps being a butt?

yea if u don't mind! i think it's fine for now though unless someone says something 21:19, November 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

just in case, I'll list the hexes here; base is #171514, and the texture is the same colour set to multiply @ 33%. Earpink is #624A45 and the nose is #230D05, and the base eye colour is #E35B22, with a dark blue to add depth. Hope those help! I used a dark blue for the shading as well, in case you wanted to match the tint at all~ :D

reuploaded i colorpicked everything directly from the file max gave me 02:08, November 5, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Poppycloud (W) ~ For Approval
to pay or not to pay for that first season of got

Remove the shading on the <--- Eye? Also I just have to say im LOVING The Squirrelflight Loner Art! Moo (talk) 08:04, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

There's a line of waste underneath the tail. 21:42, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

re-up thank you moo!

There's also two pixels of waste between the hind paw and the foreleg. 18:01, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Lo) ~ For Approval
yeet

Is it possible for you to sharpen the stripes just a little bit? They're a little less blurred on her other images. It's not too much, though.

Mudfur (Alt W) - For Evaluation
Here's my charart for Mudfur:



09:49, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles don't quite match. They're too overblurred and need to be sharper. Try looking at the old warrior for a reference. -- 13:33, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Adding on, here are some references: this and this. -- 15:40, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

His eye color on his other images seems greener, and darken the earpink. 17:47, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

There is waste floating all around the image. Remove the texture, the set doesn't have it, and define the pale belly. The mottles look better but some on the flank still don't quite match. They should be more rounded and there should be tiner specks mixed in as well. -- 23:02, November 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add depth to the shading and add shading to <--- that ear. 01:48, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:02, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded removed some waste 10:13, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to < ear  Crystie   You captured  my heart  10:24, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:56, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles seem too rounded and uniform compared to the alt star. -- 13:08, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:01, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded added some better flecks 08:08, November 4, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like Potato's comment still stands. 03:20, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:50, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Creekfeather (Alt. A) - CBA


I think you forgot the whites/lights in the eyes. 04:07, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Nope, I didn't. They're at the bottom of the pupil. -- 04:10, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

With this blank, they're really only meant to go in one place. Eye style is usually artist's choice, but at least on this blank, there's really only one place that they're designated to go. ​​​

Should I move them or should I keep the eyeshine as they are? -- 04:19, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

As I just said, this blank only has one spot they're meant to go. Please move them to where the blank has the spot for them. ​​

Reuploaded -- 04:23, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading should reach upwards to meet the back, with this source (example, of it)

Reuploaded -- 23:38, November 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Kitescratch (W) ~ For Approval
had a break but i'm back now for the time being. activity will continue to be spotty because of school  W i n d s o n g   (talk)   13:45, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, this looks great, but I thought I reserved this before? 14:52, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Windsong did reserve this before you, Les. I saw hers pop up in the activity feed before yours. -- 14:54, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Nvm then! maybe remove some of the shading on the <-- foreleg? 14:56, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree. That would contradict the light source because all the legs need be in shadow. -- 14:58, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, you could have a little bit of light there and it could still make sense with the light source. Also the eyes should be a little more amber? On my current screen they look a little washed out.

Seconding Max with this one. There are quite a few images with sources identical, or at least similar, to this who also have shading on the legs. I personally think the image could benefit from it, because otherwise it looks like he has darker legs (kinda like Sandynose or Finleap).

Pebblefoot (W) - CBA
Colors from his other images. 17:50, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:45, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sol (K) - For Approval
what a disaster. 18:29, November 3, 2019 (UTC)

Shade Pelt (K) ~ For Approval
no this is a disaster. 03:51, November 4, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good, I'd never be able to do something like this. Smooth out the shading on the shoulder? 03:23, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Just takes practice! 16:49, November 5, 2019 (UTC)

Splashpaw (TBC) (A) ~ For Approval
Some of these kit blanks are hard to translate pattern wise to the apps 23:10, November 5, 2019 (UTC)