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Ambermoon (W) ~ For Approval
I'll redo the shading if it's really as crappy as I think it is. I'll probably also smudge the stripes a bit more if needed. 14:27, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sweet! Smooth out the shading a bit. Oh and maybe blur the stripes? 17:06, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'll smude the stripes instead, and I'll redo the painful shading. 01:38, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks fine, but you should smudge it in the direction of the fur. 11:37 Thu Apr 2

I agree with Sunstream, please smooth out the shading. 12:01, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle hole :3 20:06, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Ouch! Painful mistake now that I've been doing chararts so often and I still forget to remove the triangle XP I do have a problem though, I'm in Zhuhai so my computer doesn't have gimp. I'll download it and redo the entire thing. 03:18, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 05:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more 06:19, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Still working, Bramble? 08:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-upsYep... sorry for the delay just got back from my vacation trip, and don't even talk about my computer's crappiness. 09:45, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and define the light on the paws- I'm having a rough time telling the pale parts from the main pelt.

this? 10:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why are there two of them? >.> 10:23, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

All you really have to do is edit the section and say reuploaded, tbh. You don't have to add another image in or anything of the sort- the section automatically updates with the new version once you upload it to the file... idk why it aligns it or adds a second one.

I think it looks lovely :) StormSongz (talk) 15:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you so much:))) but tbh if anyone mentions for the shading to be lightened, I'll totally agree with that 16:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Hm blur the edges of the shading a bit. Looking lovely. =) 18:32, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

can't blur it more also lightened it^^ 03:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe erase a little of the shading on that back ear on the left edge, to show a little light shining on it? Also, a little more shading along the the right edge of her cheek fur. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:31, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Not happy with these stripes :/ 03:06, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading. 03:14, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know but she seems a little lighter than her other images? It could be the use of highlights though. Also, I think the stripes are thicker and less dense on her other images. 03:45, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

If you can see here- http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Lilyheart.warrior.png - she has some gold highlights on her face and sides. Can you add those in? 13:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups They were already in, under the darker stripes, so I can't add them. I used the warrior image for reference, sooo... sorry :/ And my images always seem to look lighter, it's just the highlights. 16:50, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

the belly looks pretty grey, lighten the shading up a tad? she's pretty 20:51 Fri Apr 3

reuploaded 23:13, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 05:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading that is between the back and the belly gives the stomach a lumpy look. Could you remove it please? I'm so sorry you can totally ignore me if you want 23:21 Sun Apr 5

Still working, Shinx? Four days is good enough of a time to ask and I know you appreciate reminders.

yeeeep, I was sick for a couple days and didn't really get on the computer, sorry. 08:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think all her apprentice and her warrior need to be tweaked, as she has white patches, it's shown on her kit but not on the others. Having a white underbelly + chest doesn't really indicate patches. Could you add them, please? 09:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Nominate it first, please. Then you can ask Shinx to add the patches.

Nomination is up 10:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Needs to be dark brown, as she was specified to be that color. And add the gold highlights that were mentioned before, please. User: Dewdrop56/ talk 7:43, April, 10, 2015

Add more shading to the very edge of her tail, along the left side right next to the lineart, and pull back the shading off the white part just a little, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:32, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

She is dark brown, exactly the same shade as her other images. I colorpicked from them. She only looks lighter because I add highlights to my images. And Jayie, you kind of make sense?? I get what you mean for me to do, but where exactly on the tail do you mean? Sorry, I can't figure out where exactly you meant by "The very edge of her tail, along the left side right next to the lineart". Do you mean the tip of the tail, next to the lineart, or...? Sorry >< 22:25, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Larkkit (K) ~ CBA
Decided to do it. How do you? c: If something is wrong - write. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

P.s – Somehow, all the time want to call Larkwing.

Ok, a few things. First, please sign your posts with ~ so we know who you are. Also, don't align your images. I fixed the alignment for you, but for future reference, don't add the |left after the image. Also, the file should be named Larkkit.kit.png, so can someone fix that? As for the image, it's pretty good but define the shading and dull down the earpink. Also, I'm pretty sure he should have a black nose, as he's a black cat. 16:17, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Sorry, but I didn't understand (translator) about the signature and the left side. May you explain slightly in a different way? But I nevertheless understood some and corrected. So?

I'm really bad at explaining but I'll try. For the signature: add ~ after what you write to sign. For the image: your code should read instead of. And on the image, please dull the earpink a bit more. 17:23, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Next day I will make more dark earpink. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink after you dull it please? 17:39, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I updated. It is already possible to lay out? Сияние Кометы 12:46, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading just a little? I like this. 13:37, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – What does "Define the shading just a little" mean? Sorry, but I didn't understand. ShineStar 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's making the shading more visible, which I think you could still do 14:18, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – And how so to make? ShineStar 15:12, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Shading black cats is hard. What art program do you use? 16:17, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I use the GIMP program. ShineStar 16:22, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, tail, and the right side og the body. 11:39 Mon Apr 6

Re-uploaded – It has to be so shaded? ShineStar 15:32, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blue/smudge the shading and blur the ear pink on -> this side just a tttiinyy bit. 13:01, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded –  What, Brambleshade? ShineStar 16:17, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

In my opinion, though I am not in PCA, I think you should brighten the earpink as little is possible. Spott ehw ob bl e ''' It's   Lemon    scented!

I think the earpink is alright. 23:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose coloring? Black cats should have a really dark gray (like almost black) or black nose... I think. I remember asking about the nose thing once and got told it didn't need to be pure black.

Unless they forgot to say "re-upload" here, the nose is already black. That could be my screen though. 00:06, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

It looks red to me, not black. I zoomed in on my phone and laptop.

Re-uploaded – What you on me pulled hard? :D And now normal nose? ShineStar 07:44, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

It may be my computer or my glasses, but if not, dull the earpink to our right a tad. Nevermind. It's fine, imho.

Re-uploaded – Everything is good? Now it is possible to lay out? ShineStar 14:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:40, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Evaluation
Here's Dewy! All colorpicked from Dewpaw Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 23:16, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. 23:47, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

There are a lot of uncolored spots; fill them in, please. Also, define the shading and earpink. 00:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

In addition, there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. 00:03, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you're using the right sized blank. Did you grab it from the PCA main page? 04:36, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

If you need the right blank size, you could find it :)

There is a greenish spot on his haunch or something, you're going to have to do something about it. 13:32, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

@Scarletwind I used the male long-furred warrior blank. @Icebreeze and Foxy I'll fix it. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 13:43, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

What Scar means is that you've used the wrong sized blank. Go to the link Skid posted, right click on that image, save it, and use that to redo the image. 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

There's also waste in the part between the third and fourth chest tufts. 14:53, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fix the lighting on him. What program do you use? Also, isint he suppost to have a white belly/chest? 15:19, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I use PAINT.NET for all my images. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 17:31, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using layers? Everything seems to be blurred together. 08:18, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Well, in the new image I am creating (because of the wrong-sized blank), my layers in order from bottom to top are: Background Color, White-Gray Patches, Lineart + Eyes, Shading, and Earpink.

Ah, I think you should put the shading and earpink before the lineart. :) 21:50, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you fill in the un-colored parts around the outer edge? And there is some waste at the upper and outer edge of the tail, from what I see. Spott ehw ob bl e  It's   Lemon    scented

BTW I'm working on the new Dewnose, don't worry about any waste or etc. from this previous image. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups - *sighs heavily* :3 Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:23, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the white on the belly more visible? I can't see it.

You forgot to delete the part in between the belly and paws. It's not part of his belly! StormSongz (talk) 22:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)StormSongz

Define the light on the legs, please. 23:50, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest putting the white on another layer instead, that might the be the reason why it's turning out to look grey. 00:13, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Needs more white near the muzzle and down to the belly. The gray should be more slate- colored and the white more brightened. User:Dewdrops56/talk 6:290, April,9, 2015

That gray-white needs to be brigthened to pure white, that's what he has on his apprentice and kit. It also need to be spread so that it's touching the lineart. Yours is leaking away from the lineart a lot. Look at the apprentice. He needs white paws, a white tail-tip, white belly, white throat-to-chest, and white muzzle, nose, and under his eyes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:44, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Stonetooth (TAQ) (W) ~ CBA
My first white cat.

Define the shading on the tail a tad 07:21, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~

Define the head shading a bit? Lovely job! 17:09, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

blur the tail shading a little? mostly where it meets the base of the tail 21:04, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Thanks. :3

I love that shading sooo much. CBA? 09:05, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Patchkit (MV) (Star) ~ CBA
Poor kit ;___; 02:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the white up a bit. Pretty cute for being...deceased. ;_; Nice job! 17:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

You can clearly tell its white tbh. It doesn't need to be pure white 00:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

There is little I can do, honestly. It's one tick off of pure white, and if I lighten up the shading, it won't show up on the ginger too well, and I like how the shading darkness it now, so I'd rather not touch it. 00:09, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Make it pure white. I don't know what people have against using it, but it's more than acceptable and lessens the chance of it being gray. Or perhaps add some faint highlights on the white.

Re-upped Oh no, it's not that I'm against using it. It's just that I color picked off his kit image, that's why it's off. I actually always use pure white unless there is a image to match- Now it's pure white, so it shouldn't look too dark. 07:50, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

that's bcause he has very slight texture, I used pure white for the base. I always do. 07:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I added texture 08:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think the ginger patch along his back/shoulder would extend a bit further down and go closer to his neck and the lineart where the leg starts. I also think the ginger on --> paw should be extended a fair bit- it looks like there's only a small part of the foot and barely anything else on that part that's got white on it. I think it could possibly be extended to the elbow-area... I'm looking at the kit image, and it appears to do that on David's image. Unless my eyes are tired? idk

Re-upped Did I get it? 02:57, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Love that shading. CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:48, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (ro) ~ CBA
i have returned 22:03, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tortie parts. 22:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

She has tortoiseshell splotches, which I believe is something like this? 00:02, April 8, 2015 (UTC) Maybe a bit more patchy? User: Dewdrops25:45, April, 7, 2015

I think the splotches on the tortoiseshell were meant to be on the tortie part? I'd like a second opinion on that ;;; 01:19, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

splotchy could just mean messy looking, it doesn't have to be tortoisehsll patches. 03:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, the quote was "her tortoiseshell splotches...." 03:13, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think if that's what the quote says, you should probably match that. I changed Alder when she was called splotchy, so it's only fair to change this to match what the quote says. Judging by the quote, it sounds like a white base with tortie patches and stuff... kinda like Sweetpaw.

re-up i guess so 20:24, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading just a little bit. This is lovely. 21:43, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up thank 20:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

do you think you could look the patches look more like tortiseshell? she looks kinda like a brown patched tabby rn. 10:15, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up she's a chocolate tortie just so u know 10:21, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add a few more tortie splotches and mottles onto the two big patches on her back? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:49, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up idk man 02:34, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 09:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Pink Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ohlook. 22:32 Tue Apr 7

I think the white needs to be brightened quite a bit. He looks too...yellow? StormSongz (talk) 22:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

the white is fine, actually. nice job, hawky 23:16, 04/7/2015 Looks great. If you need to, define shading. User talk: Dewdrops66/talk > 25:23, 04/7/2015

Hawky, Perchpaw isn't archived. I'll archive it this time, but if you post something without waiting again, it will be declined on the spot. 00:05, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

can you maybe layer some blue over his eyes? from what I know albinistic cats have blue eyes that look red, not just red. 03:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah see I was going to make the eyes blue but I wasn't sure if you'd be able to see the red in the pupils. 22:13 Wed Apr 8

...Can you guys tell the shading is defined? I feel like I don't see it so I might define it some more... but idk. 22:14 Wed Apr 8

Define the light on then back legs, please. 00:09, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

His eyes are too, blue. We have no cite for it, anyways. User talk: Dewdropps56/talk > 6:42, April, 9, 2015( UTC)

and no cite for red eyes either, and albinistic cat eyes arent pure pink theyre blue with a pink tint, like humans I believe. ._. maybe tint it a little bit pink if it doesn't look purple, though. 13:45, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

The pupils are dark red - which I can lighten to make it more pinkish. I can't do much with the eyes because pixels don't allow much detail in them. Also, the eyes are technically artist's choice, so idk about that. If I make them any pinker they may turn purple. However, I could add a pink dot instead of a blue one, so it would be blue, pink, blue. idk you can tell me. I will get to the light definition in my next upload. 22:33 Thu Apr 9

yeah true, and I think that would be a good idea actually. 10:13, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 0:27 Sat Apr 11

Larchkit (MV) (Star) ~ CBA
hello. 01:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smothen the shading on the tail maybe? Lovely Breezy 01:52, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to be honest. I think if she smoothed it out she would be told to define it 04:00, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Bramble. It could be smoothed out. while you're at it, smudge the earpink a bit more 09:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 04:35, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

This looks great. CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:51, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Minnow (R) ~ For Approval
I'm trying something new for me so paws crossed it works. 03:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur or smudge the gray 03:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I also defined the texture, cause you couldn't really see it. 06:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot, please.

Blur the gray more and define the shading more 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can't see it. misread fox's comment at first, didn't notice the last bit 10:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload The white is pure white, it's the shading. For that reason, I won't darken the shading anymore. 22:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define doesnt automatically mean darken. I'd suggest you try to unblur/unsmudge the shading some, because i still can't see it. Also, to brighten up the white, perhaps try using pure white highlights? Its not mandatory, so that part is up to you. 05:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Not exactly sure how to do that, but I've just redone the shading altogether so that it's covering more of the gray fur. Look much better. 05:39, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Much better. :) Define the shading on the tail? 07:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:34, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth on the tail? it looks flat. 10:14, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define all the shading except on the legs? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:52, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:43, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define light on the tail 11:05, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (Alt. W2) - CBA
04:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:06, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front paw farthest from us? 05:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:37, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Coul you recede some of the shading on her upper leg and shouler? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:53, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:03, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

This is gorgeous, Scarlet. CBA? 09:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Slash (Alt Ro) - CBA
I took the gray as a partial of gray tabby (and gave him everything else he was cited for since it is part of his description) since I think we operate like that with normal descriptions...idk about you, but writing tabby all the time would get tedious and redundant.

Re-uploaded. David suggesting erasing the whiskers since he's clearly mentioned with only half of them and I would think that's kinda important to his description.

Does he have white stripes on his front legs? Otherwise, could you define the shading on the front leg farthest from us? This is beautiful.. I swear how the hell do you always make them look so perfect. o3o 09:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. They should be slashes, not stripes. I made them wrap around, kinda like how a ribbon would work, since there's not much to work with in terms of leg space. My OC is a silver tabby, so I have a lot of time to make gray/silver tabbies and it's some of my favorite things to make, besides black-and-white cats

define the shading a bit? this is gorgeous 11:37 Wed Apr 8

Re-uploaded. Thank youuu.

Smudge the stripes a tad more? Lovely job, he's simply striking. =) 18:36, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Um, they're not smudged at all, actually... that's just how I used the paintbrush tool. o3o

Add more shading on the belly and hip? They look a little flat. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:55, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just tweaked it in various places tbh.

Love the stripes. CBA, anyone? 09:04, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (L) - CBA
Why the hell did she hang out with Clear Pain in the first place 08:37, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes just a tiny bit by a pixel or two where they're thicker. There are a couple that look to be maybe six or so pixels long, when they look slightly shorter in width on the rogue. Also, unsmudge the tail stripes a bit as well- they're not as smudged on her rogue image. That's what I'm basing all my comments off of since it's a clear side-view. And she hung out because they're both trash imho.

Re-uploaded *prays to Erins that her kits won't be trash too* 08:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why do people hate them so much? >.> I love them both ;_; especially Clear Sky. Anyways, beautiful^^ I think her rogue image's stripes are less broken, and are less smudged/lighter texture. 09:42, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine, I have the rogue file that Beebs sent to me and I matched it 09:44, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

What's the point of asking for comments if users are going to reject them as often as they do? Yes, I'm going there, because this is totally unnecessary. Bramblesnow is correct, honestly. I'm looking right at her rogue image and they are smudged slightly less than this.

Re-uploaded Sorry about that ;.; is this better? 10:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I have a slight concern. If it's a side view, and Star Flower has a stripe along her back, wouldn't it show less than that big stripe you have? Maybe thin it out a little bit, as well as the base of the tail towards her back leg. StormSongz (talk) 15:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Am I the only that's happy for Clear Sky, that he has a new mate? Looks great. See if you Should consider blurring it....?User:Dewdrops56/Dewdrops56 8:21, April, 8, 2015

The stripes are smudged, not blurred. I'll try to smudge them more when I've got the computer, but not much, otherwise it would be just contradicting to what Cloudy said, and someone will tell me to unsmudge it again. Also, as for the stripe, the loner is facing a different side. But actually, I might redo these stripes since I seem to have trouble tweaking them right. 23:22, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I am not smudging them more now. That will contradict to what Skye said, someone will tell me to unsmudge it again because that's how it looks on the rogue 02:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks good now :3 13:54, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Strenthen the shading on the belly and throat, they're leaking away from the side edges of the legs and muzzle, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:57, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you try lightening her white fur? I know it's the shading, but it is described as pure white, and a bit of highlight lighting wouldn't hurt. 23:50, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back and/or head a little bit? Unless told otherwise (I'm sleepy and on my tablet). You did gorgeous on this. :)

Re-uploaded There isn't back shading Blitz, but thanks :) 06:04, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 09:04, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the dorsal stripe on the rogue's tail is thinner than the one you have on the loner's tail- can you thin it out by a few pixels?

Re-uploaded 14:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re- CBA? 14:15, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Cricket (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ew ._. But hey I got my uploader working again. K so I would rather not darken the shading too much more as it starts to looks really yucky with the base colors. Comment away~ 13:04, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. It shouldn't look too bad, imho. Is it tinted, or did you use black? Either choice is good, and I know black on ginger or orange cats looks pretty wicked.

Should he be short furred? Slate said that they are completely different. Just a suggestion!User:Dewdrops56/talk, 8:25, April, 8, 2015

Re-uploaded. Lol I actually used black, even though I had serious thoughts about tinting it, but I decided to give it a chance. And Dewdrops, I think Slate was talking about their personalities rather than their fur length, kind of like Squirrelflight and Leafpool. 19:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add more shading to the back of the neck and upper shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:01, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did a couple other things too. 14:10, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenwing (MCA) ~ CBA
Changes Yeah... I can't shade on black cats or apprentice/mca blanks. I will probably redo this painfully bad shading on my next upload. 16:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the leaves. 17:52, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reups redid the shading, and I got rid of the waste. 22:39, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

More shading just under the bend of that front leg? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:02, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know the exact place you want me to put more shading - I've looked, but I don't see a place that needs more shading added. 22:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a bt more on the gind lets and up to the tail? Great job! 02:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the base a few ticks, not too much, just a little bit. 10:39, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 13:42, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 14:28, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reed (Ro) - For Approval
20:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? Looking nice :) 05:01, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the overall shading- It may just be my monitor, but i can barely see any. 05:14, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

He looks so fluffy! O-O 13:55, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed, define overall shading, and lighten the silver maybe a touch? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:04, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups I tinted the shading,i hope it helps :p 09:55, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs furthest from us? Pretty! 13:50, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks :) 15:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Brindlekit (TAQ) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay... comments? 20:41, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit more? And define the earpink a bit as well? Otherwise I love her! 22:27, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 22:31, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

This is so beautiful O.O define the light on the tail? 00:17, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a touch more, and define the shading a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:04, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Fox! =) 21:10, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks good! 00:29, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! =D I really appreciate it but please give some criticism next time as non-critique comments are considered spam. 01:27, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a lil bit? So cute! 13:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! 14:06, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Honeykit (K) - CBA
p much a diluted brightheart 13:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Looks beautiful and adorable! User: Dewdrops/ talk 6:33, April, 10, 2015

Dewdrop, please do not spam an image with non-critique comments. Compliments are nice, but they are considered as spam. For the image, define the ear pink just a little. 14:05, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:29, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Erase a little of the shading on the chest, the light should be hitting there. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:05, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:07, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I absolutely love this. CBA?

The left ear looks too yellow. Define it to pink, please?[[ User: Dewdrops56/talk] 7:04, April,m11, 2015

That would be the earfur. I believe it looks fine as-is. 14:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine. Continuing CBA. 14:25, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Jay Frost (Ancient) - For Approval
This is the culmination of all the good things in this world. :D Also, I accidently misnamed this file, could someone rename it for me? Sorry about that. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:07, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I named it Jay Frost.ancient (2).png by accident. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:08, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink? Lovely! 22:52, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

And define the shading everywhere. Its so beautiful x3 02:01, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should cite the fact that she's an adult on the page first 09:52, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's a he! Anyways, this is soooooo gorgeous... 10:08, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

What are those pink marks, along the back and the hind leg? Are they scars? How on earth do you even do this stuff? This is incredible... 13:47, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

You never cease to amaze me with your beautiful chararts, Jayie. Do you mind smudging the scars just a tad? 15:31, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smokekit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I actually like this wow 19:23, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, if there is any. Looks lovely. c: 19:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. Its probably my monitor or its probably really hard to see. 13:58, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:16, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Shadepaw (A) ~ For Approval
21:59, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Looks too black, or maybe it's just my POV. User: Dewdrops56/ talk 15:21, April, 10, 2015

Re-uploaded. Could've just been the shading, I lightened it a little. 22:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

It's still black on my screen. Maybe lighten the base, too? Also, can you define the earpink? 23:31, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with the above; it looks like solid black. I'm having a hard time seeing the initial pelt color. 00:22, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Hopefully it's still dark brown. 00:30, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, it's dark brown, and much better! Define the earpink some more. Looking good! 00:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! I think the earpink looks fine. 01:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading around the face. This is purrtyyy! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:14, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten it up everywhere and blur it tons. 10:38, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and back legs. Good job! 13:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's just me, but I'm still having a hard time seeing the ear pink. Maybe lighten it a tad? 13:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Looks way better now! I can actually see the pelt color. Maybe define ear shading, though? User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:08,April, 11,2015

Re-uploaded.  16:35, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Looks better! 18:22, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Noticed some waste on the back, I don't know how I missed that. 18:45, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
I was so happy when Thrush was approved. I'm going to try to get this one approved aswell :) 22:54, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little, maybe lighten it too. 23:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

The base colour doesn't look right. this is the base colour I used for the warrior. 23:47, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Red-did the shading postion.. base colour.. and raised the lightness of the shading. 01:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit unless someone says otherwise. (Sorry, I'm tired and I'm making some errors tonight). ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:16, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink does need to be dulled down, indeed. Smudge it more too so that it doesn't look so hard edged. and while you're at it, blur the shading more. 09:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

This needs to be renamed into File:Appledusk.star.png 10:37, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit. 13:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

i think its fine. 13:46, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Renamed.

re-up bloop? 13:55, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe get rid of some of the shading on the side of the nose facing the light source, as well as the muzzle. It wouldn't be shaded there. 15:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sleekpaw (A) ~ For Approval
very sleek very shiny 13:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I love the texture! Very interesting. Define the ear pink just a bit? And maybe the belly shading? 15:38, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Petalkit (MV) (Star) - For Evalutation
My first charart. Horrible texture, I know... ♨ Little   Latte  ♨ 14:42, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paws. This is very good =). 15:29, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reedshine (MV) (Q) ~ For Evaluation
My first charart! I hope you guys like it. I worked real hard on it. Okay...comments? 15:20, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe this should be "For Evaluation". Other than that, I find it good! ♨ Little   Latte  ♨ 15:26, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

*fixed*  15:28, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

blur the belly shading, and don't align your images. looking good. 15:30, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:32, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Me no like. ;-; (Did the image align? or did I misname? I can't tell)

Smooth out the shading on the back, define the hind leg shading, define the eye depth, and blur the earpink just a tad. Looks nice, other than that. 18:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. 18:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lizardtail (W) ~ For Approval
So here is my first character. Yes, I don't know how to do texture... ✿Bird ride23✿  Colorful world is around me  19:01, April 11, 2015 (UTC)