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Sweetbriar (Star) ~ For Approval
Can't believe I actually did this! I'm a beginner don't judge me. Also I want to know how you guys do those signatures so pretty. BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 17:44, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Looks pretty good for your first image! Although, since it's your first, we need the title to be 'For Evaluation' instead of 'For Approval'. Also this needs to be reserved on the charart table. As for the image itself, the shading needs to be smoothed out more, and it looks like you're missing lineart on the eyes. Try overlapping the current lineart onto the existing image, and that should fix it. Try to blend the earpink a little more and maybe use a little more pinkish-gray color instead of orange. Technically all colors need to be colorpicked from the existing images, and how you do that is you save one of the older images and open that into the art program and colorpick from the places you need to color that specific area. In terms of stripe placement, it needs quite a bit more, and I believe there is texture, or that's probably just the stripes smudged. Sorry if this is a wall of text. ;-; 17:59, 2/23/2017

Sorry for double post, but the shading is leaking in some areas along the image, and the nose needs to be colored in. If you ever need any help, don't hesitate to ask! I'd be more than happy to help you out with image creation. Just gimme a shout on my talk page :) 18:00, 2/23/2017

Heh, I'm not that pleased with the final product. Thanks, though. I can't get to the editing yet, because i'm working on a school project. :( I will try to get to it, though. Thanks again BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 18:31, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

You're amazing at the stripes! Even I can't do stripes properly yet. Mind defining the eye depth?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:19, February 24, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

reuploaded BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 00:58, February 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink, and give the shading more shape so it isn't a straight line across the body. Curve it along the face and same with the other parts. The apprentice tutorials are lots of help. :) 01:01, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you know how to use the smudge tool? If so, everything still needs to be smudged: the shading, stripes, and white parts. It also appears you're trying to do things on one layer. Do you know how to use layers? If not, I suggest asking one of the other members here to show you how to do an image like that, specifically on a stream. 01:10, 2/24/2017

The layers were a bit of a hassle. When I tried to use them, my paint tool, Paint.NET shipped it out as one layer. . . so, not really the best option for me. Also I use pixlr and I still haven't got the hang of it. >:( BlazeclawXAshfur (talk) 06:06, February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you know of a program called Paint Tool SAI? It's actually a lot easier and more nifty to use than Paint.NET. You could download the free trial and get started :) It's a lot better 13:37, 2/24/2017

reuploaded 17:57 February 24, 2017 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd for the kit? The colors look a little off and the images have texture. 18:53 Fri Feb 24

You nees to use layers, Starlight. Your lineart is blurred in many places. Please, if you need help, don't hesitate to ask. 19:39, 2/24/2017

Yep, I need help. For some reason I can't use layers primarily because of the weird way my art progam works. I might need to get a different art program. Also the apprentice tutorials aren't really helping me. And before anyone asks, I can get very busy during weekdays. So bombarding me with all you got is not the best way to go. 21:36 Feb 24, 2017

Define the eye depth, and smooth the shading on the front legs and tail

reuploaded --BlazeclawXAshfall (talk) 06:23, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

I think the nose pink should be a bit brighter to match the kit's. And smooth out and add some more texture. 16:25, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

There seem to be lighter lines (probably just erased marks) on the stripes that shouldn't be there, and the stripes on the queen and kit don't look quite as blurred, maybe sharpen them a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:36, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

There should only be three colors for the pelt: The white, the base, and the stripes. It appears that you have an additional shade in there within the stripes that shouldn't be there. The texture is also beneath the stripes, placed much closer together and darker in color. I'm gonna guess those lighter lines are texture. If you want the HEX codes for the colors, don't hesitate to ask me. I'm also having trouble seeing the markings at all under the shading. 22:31 Mon Feb 27

Yep. Can I have the HEX codes? I really need to redo this somehow. . . --BlazeclawXAshfall (talk) 23:31, February 27, 2017 (UTC)

Base: 947455 ; Stripes: 3b2618 ; White: FFFFFF ; Ear pink/Nose: 3b2618 ^ There ya go. The texture is two layers with the same color as the stripes with lowered opacity (77%). Hopefully this helps ^^ 23:43 Mon Feb 27

Can I have the HEX for the eyes? Also, you made a mistake with the Ear pink/Nose part. It's the same as the stripes. :P So maybe the fixed HEX for that as well? BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:04 2/28/17

There also seems to be a layer of sharp lines scattered on top of the image - could you smooth those out?

b58d8e <-- There is the correct one. Sorry 'bout that. My computer is sometimes a little glitchy from the programs I have to run for my research and whatnot. And the eyes are good how they are now, just need a little depth is all. 01:14 Tue Feb 28

re-up Should I smudge the texture? I'm not sure about that. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:04 2/28/17

Yeah it looks too solid. Also, smudge/blur the ear pink too.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:41, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Heh, it still doesn't look good. BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 03:14 3/1/17

Smudge the earpink?😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 05:57, March 1, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

The stripes on the eyes should be thicker. 21:26, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest, face and paws, and there's some specks of white on the <--- front paw that's not shaded. 22:09, March 1, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps smooth/even out the texture, and define the eye depth

Actually, can you help me with the eye depth and earpink part? I probably won't be able to know what you're talking about. . . BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:43 3/2/17

Eye depth means varying the color of the eye, so it's not just flat color. So say, for example, an eye would be a lighter shade up top, and would gradually get darker as it went downward. For the earpink, it looks sharp, as if it was drawn on. Much of the time, we strive to make it more realistic, and we blur/smudge it into the fur to make it look as if it has a tuft of fur in it, or it gradually transitions from earpink to pelt.

Will get to that tomorrow (in my time). It's nighttime here! BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 05:57 3/2/17

re-up BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 23:53 3/2/17

Smooth out the shading on the chest and main body.

You seem to be doing quite well now, so I'll promote you into an apprentice! The stripes still need to be smudged, and it appears that some shading or the earpink is leaking onto a few pixels on the ear? Smooth out the shading on the front legs/paws, and switch the tail shading to the other side of the tail, as your light source contradicts that. The tail shading is a little sharp at the tail-tip, so maybe smooth that out as well. Also the shading inside ---> ear needs to be smoothed out as well, and I still can't make out the eye depth. 13:23, 3/03/2017

Could you define the markings on the face? I'm having some trouble seeing them. 17:39, March 3, 2017 (UTC)

re-up can't wait until this is approved-- i had to use the erase tool because my program wasn't cooperating BlazeclawXAshfur  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 23:51 3/4/17

Comments before approval? 00:48, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry to break the CBA, but the shading needs to be smoothed out a lot.

There is waste between the tail and back and by the front paw, on the right side. 02:36, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

There's a few pixels of shading missing from where the flank shading meets the shoulder. 02:45, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

For the tail shading source, I believe it would look something like this, not all on one side as it is currently because of your light source.

The top of the second line above the square marking on the side needs to be much thicker, I think, to match the other images, and there are small brown lines all over the image that I don't see on the other images. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:55, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up there, how's that? BlazeclawXAshfur Tails Entwined in Fanfic 23:20 3/5/17

Could you add a bit more shading on the <- side of the tail, nearer to the top, and lessen it in the middle? It still looks mostly on one side, and the light shows from <-- so it wouldn't be quite as much. Also, can you lighten the white a little on the chest? Most of it looks really red/brown when it's under shading.

The white doesn't need to be lightened, it's the shading that's too dark. Lower the opacity and give it a good blur/smudge

You're missing the dorsal stripe. The queen is the first image in this set, not the kit.

re-up What is the dorsal stripe?? o_O ;-; BlazeclawXAshfall  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 1:23 3/7/17

A dorsal stripe is the main tabby stripe on a cat, like Graystripe as a prime example. 14:51, 3/07/2017

To add on to what Winter said; it's the stripe along the spine, which you still need to add. Examples of those kinds of stripes on StarClan blanks (if you're not totally sure where it goes) are like File:Mousefang.star.png, File:Amberleaf.star.png, File:Appledawn.star.png, and File:Frog (Ro).star.png. It won't usually directly follow the lineart and will look like the images I've linked.

Define the shading on the tail a bit? It looks really flat--😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:04, March 8, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

re-up Next time I will be doing a less complicated pattern! :P XD BlazeclawXAshfall  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 00:15 3/8/17 UTC

You still need to add the dorsal stripe please 00:30, 3/08/2017

Oops. Totally forgot! What happens when you're rushed while doing homework. #multitasking XD BlazeclawXAshfall  Tails Entwined in Fanfic 01:16 3/8/17 UT

Smoothen out the shading on the paws and chest. 01:27, March 8, 2017 (UTC)

I'm still figuring out how you guys made those cool signatures you have. Define the shading on the tail a bit again? Sorry about that XD--😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 03:45, March 8, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

re-up I swear lowering the opacity led to trouble with the tail. Shine! Beneath the Starlight

Maybe add a few more stripes on the <-- leg, since there seems to be more, thicker ones on the other images

re-up Added a few stripes in between the existing ones. Proud user of GIMP that doesn't cooperate with me sometimes. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 23:52 3/9/17 UTC

This is very good. Comments before approval? 18:30, March 10, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry to break CBA again, but this does not match very well still. The stripes need to be smudged and there still needs to be texture. The stripes are looking a little paint-brushy right now. Also there's too many stripes on the front legs. And those markings on the muzzle area are not stripes. Please remove those <span style="">19:23, 3/10/2017

Perhaps very slightly recede the shading on the chest, and smooth it out. It still covers most of the white and the shading makes it look dark

Can someone help me with the dorsal stripe? I still can't get it!!! Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 17:44 3/11/17 UTC

The dorsal stripe looks like a plain line of color down her back. It should flow with the stripes more. Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon<span style=""> 21:22, March 11, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

So the stripes above the dorsal stripe should also curve toward the other side like on the bottom. The way I matched for the kit gives pretty much the same pattern on both sides. I'll get a red line of what I'm talking about in a little bit. <span style="">21:27 Sat Mar 11

Here. I rushed the pattern a bit but this is about what it should look like. Also, define the texture a bit. <span style="">21:50 Sat Mar 11

re-up Eh. Tried to copy the thing. Nightmare to do so, I tell ya. Oh well. May not be on until tomorrow afternoon. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 1:58 3/12/17 UTC

Thin the dorsal stripe a little, and define the texture

On the ---> right ear, it looks like the fur color is leaking into the ear pink. Patch that up, please.

The stripes on the eyes need to be thicker. 05:03, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

One of the tail stripes near the tip of the tail is leaking out and creating waste 19:05, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes need to be smudged still and again, there's too many stripes on the front legs <span style="">19:45, 3/12/2017

re-up Texture's there, if you haven't noticed. I tried using an airbrush at first--too light. Then I gave up and used a regular paintbrush on the normal setting. Eh. . . I removed some stripes around the front leg area, but I'm not quite getting the stripe thing. What do you mean the stripes on the eyes need to be thicker? Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 22:40 3/12/17 UTC

You did not reupload a new image. <span style="">22:45, 3/12/2017

*Sigh* I feel like my brain has taken a nap. But there you go: the new image. Sorry. :P Shine!  🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 23:05 3/12/17 UTC

On the ears, the ear pink is leaking out of the lineart. It's basically outside the lineart, if that makes more sense Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon<span style=""> 01:10, March 13, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

That line near the tail is still there. It's in that empty oval that the tail creates 01:55, March 13, 2017 (UTC)

re-up How did I not catch the ear pink thing? Way to go, me. #facepalm Shine!  🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 5:08 3/13/17

There's still a speck of earpink outside the lineart on > side Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon<span style=""> 06:31, March 13, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

There's still waste around the whole image <span style="">17:30, 3/13/2017

Where? Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 23:17 3/13/17 UTC

Everywhere circled in red <span style="">01:40, 3/14/2017

Not really seeing it? Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 1:42 3/14/17 UTC

It's there. <span style="">01:45, 3/14/2017

re-up There. Tried to look closely, but even though I'm nearsighted, I can't see that closely, now can I? Shine!  🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 01:57 3/14/17 UTC

You missed a bunch. Go over the areas Snow circled again. Also, smoothen out the shading in the ear :] 02:00, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Just tell me exactly where the waste is, because I'm sorry, but I really cannot see it. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 2:04 3/14/17 UTC

Starlight I literally showed you where they were :/ <span style="">02:47, 3/14/2017

re-up That work for you? I just went on to Paint.Net and used the wand tool and hit delete. Works? Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 04:54 3/14/17 UTC

Smooth out the shading more <span style="">14:35, 3/14/2017

Thicken the stripes on the front legs a lil' bit - to match the queen's placement better

re-up Removed some shading on the chest, because I think someone suggested that earlier. And I used the smudge on 100% rate, but I can't guarantee the smoothness. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 23:43 3/14/17 UTC

Smooth out the shading more everywhere please. Define the eye depth, and the stripes are still paint brushy. Please make them more pixely to match the other images and then smudge them. Also the stripes on the face need to be thicker. The M stripe on the forehead does not connect to the line by the forehead, so please fix that. <span style="">13:41, 3/15/2017

re-up Can't wait till this is approved. So much work. . . . Shine!  🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 1:07 3/16/17 UTC

Smooth out the shading more and smudge the stripes more <span style="">01:20, 3/16/2017

Stripes are too sharp, and smooth out the chest shading Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 01:25, March 16, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

re-up "I think this looks great" Starlight said sarcastically. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 05:27 3/16/17 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the face but including the ear. Stripes are not smudged enough either. <span style="">11:46, 3/16/2017

Thin the dorsal stripe a little more

Too much? re-up Used the smudge at a rate of 75. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 21:43 3/16/17 (UTC)

The stripes are looking too paint brushy again. I dont understand what youre doing for smudging them? Are you going around the edges and smudging them to mimic a blur? Because thats not matching the other images. When i say smudge the stripes i mean literally take the smudge tool and go straight through the stripes. Youll still need to pixellate the stripes more to match the other imsges <span style="">22:29, 3/16/2017

re-up Argh this is so hard! Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 22:50 3/16/17 (UTC)

I think you should smudge the stripes on the flank and back again. --ErmineGlow (talk) 22:54, March 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, most especially on the chest

re-up Dang it! Why did I choose Sweetbriar again? Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 23:50 3/16/17 (UTC)

And re-up again. I'm so confused on why I chose this cat. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 23:52 3/16/17 (UTC)

Theres always the option of withdrawing an image if you think its too tough :p smudge the stripes more and smooth out the shading againm im really having trouble seeing the differences <span style="">13:15, 3/17/2017

Earpink is leaking out of the top tips of both ears

re-up Nah, I'm not going to withdraw unless it becomes seriously hard. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 01:33 3/17/17 (UTC)

I'm really confused. It doesn't appear in your recent history that you really changed anything other than the shading darkness and tint. If anything you only made the stripes more blocky. Smoothing out the shading does not mean making the shading darker. It means taking a blur tool and going around the edges of the shading to smooth it out - which you are not doing. Also you've been asked several times to smudge the stripes, and the only progress I see with that is some of the stripes have one line through them, which is not at all what was asked of you. The smudging of the stripes entails going through the stripes (if they are horizontal) smudge them vertically. If they are vertical, smudge them horizontally. You appear to be smudging horizontally with horizontal stripes. So please fix this. <span style="">03:33, 3/18/2017

re-up I really hope that this is what you mean. Sigh. Shine!  🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 05:17 3/18/17 (UTC)

The dorsal stripe is leaking away from the lineart on the back, and also, thicken the stripes on the <-- front leg.

re-up How do you guys notice these things? Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 18:17 3/18/17 (UTC)

Dorsal stripe is still leaking away from the lineart along the back and <-- side, and also, the tail and <-- front leg stripes are leaking too.

re-up I honestly cannot see these things. That work for you? Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 18:33 3/18/17 (UTC)

No, it's still definitely there. I've circled in red for you the places that are leaking.

Can you, in detail, tell me exactly where the waste is. Exactly. Circling won't help me, because it's just too vague for me. Sorry for the hassle.

Go to the shading layer, use the magic wand tool, and select. It should show where the waste is, and then erase it. Do that with all the layers to make sure all the waste is gone. Spooky's circled it for you. Shown you exactly where the waste is, but I'm having a hard time understanding why you can't see it. Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 19:24, March 18, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Just take the wand tool and select all areas outside of the image, go to each layer and erase everything and that should get rid of the waste. But Starlight, Spooky has shown you exactly where the waste is. If it's circled in red, you get a vague idea of where it is so you can erase it. I really don't understand what's so hard about that. Also to get the correct smudging to match the other images, please smudge the edges of the stripes, which means all around the stripes; horizontal if they're vertical, vertical if they're horizontal. <span style="">19:48, 3/18/2017

To make clear, I was referring to the waste in those areas, and also, the dorsal stripe has the lighter brown base poking through the top. Fill that in with darker brown. That needs to be filled in.


 * I actually think the dorsal stripe is supposed to be like that, Spooky :P <span style="">19:59, 3/18/2017

re-up Pretty sure I'm blind right now. Need to ask some peeps. 21:02 3/18/17 UTC

Maybe smudge the --> earpink? --Shypaw11 (talk) 16:50, March 19, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Define the shading depth and smoothen it out. 17:31, March 19, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I almost put one of my other cats in here. They look too similar lol. 20:13 3/19/17

Add a little more light on the chest?

re-up There, how's that? I didn't realize it lol. 05:21 3/20/17

Smooth out the chest shading more and smudge the stripes more. Also idk if it's just me, but a lot of the lineart has been thinned out? Can you overlay the correct lineart over the top please. <span style="">01:16, 3/21/2017


 * Nvm about the lineart, im too tired for this <span style="">01:17, 3/21/2017

re-up I really don't want to use the blur tool anymore because then the shading on the tail would probably disappear. Yes, I'll fix the shading on the tail later. Also I'm afraid the shading on the paws would disappear as well. 03:32 3/22/17 UTC

Define the shading depth some more. And i feel like the stomach/flank shading could use a bit more smoothing <span style="">13:40, 3/22/2017


 * Actually you know what I just noticed? I think you're gonna have to smudge the shading in order for it to match. ;; Sorry! <span style="">13:57, 3/22/2017

The tail shading still looks really flat Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 16:22, March 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

re-up What do you mean, smudge the shading? Gulp! 23:09 3/22/17 (UTC)

Quietkit (Star) ~ For Approval
First charart. I'm not sure if I did this right. Shypaw11 (talk) 16:48, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Alright, so this is a good job for your first time. This might be a whole wall of text, I apologize in advance.

The major thing would be to match the other image. Here, the chest is a more rounded yellow color with orange splotches. On the other image, the chest is an orangey-brown color kind of in a flash-design, so maybe if you changed the shape and either smudged/blurred (not sure which one) the colour, it would look similar. I'm not sure, but I think you're allowed to colour-pick from the other images. Next, the earpink here is a very neon purple colour, and we don't want that. On the kit image, the earpink is a more reddish colour, so even just colour picking and changing that would work. The other image has texture, which would mean taking a 1px or whatever brush and making small lines that look like fur. And then there are small things, such as the nose colour being pink, and the eyes being a darker blue. You could also define the eye depth (which means the colours in the eye go from light to dark). I hope this wasn't too harsh or long ... great job nonetheless :) 17:06, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can you please explain the texture a bit more? Shypaw11 (talk) 17:49, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Texture is basically adding "fur" to the charart, or adding the effect of fur so it seems like it's not a flat image. It's not required, but since the kit image has texture, it is required for the star image. To add texture, take a 1px (usually the smallest brush size you have) and add small lines to mimic the direction of fur. This is usually done on a different layer (usually a layer above the pelt color and stripes but usually not above the shading). I usually use black or a darker hue than the pelt color for texture, but you can always lower the opacity of it later.

Also, I think the cream belly should stretch all the way to the <-- chest fluff, and down to the underside of the chest where it meets the shoulder. And darken/define your shading. ^^ You're doing a great job so far. 18:15, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Winterpaw and Vec! I defined the shading, added texture, and fixed the chest fur. Shypaw11 (talk) 18:47, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink some, and expand the chest to fill the spot to the <--, since it doesn't quite fill where it's supposed to be. Also, the color of it looks different than the kit, and a bit too orange. Define the shading, as well.

Reuploaded Defined shading, smoothed ear pink, and lightened and expanded chest fur. Shypaw11 (talk) 21:42, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the texture a bit, as well as the chest. Also, the chest looks too bright and orange. Try colorpicking from the kit. 22:18, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid shading, texture and stripes. How do you colorpick from a different image? Shypaw11 (talk) 22:38, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened Shading Shypaw11 (talk) 23:12, March 5, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure what program you use, but to answer your previous question: When color picking another image, download it, open it in your art program, and then use the color-picking tool to grab it's color. On my program, it looks like a dropper, but on others, I'm sure there's a guide somewhere that would show which one it is. Try to pick from the lightest point, not under shading or texture, if you can. Then, you'll have that color saved to use on your image.

Reuploaded Thanks Spooky! I use GIMP, and hopefully this is better. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:08, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink, blur/smudge the shading and smooth out the stripes on the arms and tail.😼вяσкєη_ғσσт😼 (talk) 00:30, March 6, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded Smudged ear pink, smoothed out stripes, and blurred the shading. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:56, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the image. Shypaw11 (talk) 01:32, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Are you colorpicking from the image? The colors look a little off, especially the chest. Connect the lines of the texture. Smudge the chest and earpink some more <span style="">01:37, 3/06/2017

There is waste beside and on top of the <- ear. Also, maybe smudge/blur the earpink a bit more, and make it less neon, darker. 01:59, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

The eye looks a bit milky? Or is that just me. .3. 02:40, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 03:04, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading some?

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 20:48, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Are those lines on the body texture? Because they look a little. . . strange. Also smudge the ears a bit so it looks like ear fur. I also suggest improving the shading, mostly on the chest. Refer to the apprentice tutorials if you need it, they can be lifesavers! BlazeclawXAshfall Tails Entwined in Fanfic 2:59 3/7/17

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 03:28, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Everything needs to be smoothed out more <span style="">23:57, 3/07/2017

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 02:38, March 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading again, please. 18:29, March 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink out some, and define the texture under the shading

Reuploaded --Shypaw11 (talk) 01:31, March 11, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

The nose pink is a bit too neon, it should be more orangey. Same with the earpink, it should be darker and less bright. :) 17:33, March 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Shypaw11 (talk) 19:34, March 11, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

I think there's some waste around the ears and the top of the head. 19:07, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Shypaw11 (talk) 19:15, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the lines on the face; they're too blocky. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 22:42 3/12/17 UTC

Reuploaded --Shypaw11 (talk) 22:57, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

Everything still looks like it needs to be smoothed out more <span style="">17:31, 3/13/2017

Reuploaded --Shypaw11 (talk) 23:40, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste around the ears. It's either waste or blurred lineart. 23:47, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 23:55, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink, and define the shading on the tips of the front paws

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 00:11, March 15, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Smudge the ear pink some more and define the eye depth. Homosneksual (talk) 00:16, March 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 00:38, March 15, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Theres waste around the head, chest, and tail. Also youre getting there! Ill promote you to an apprentice once i get home. Also smudge the chest a tiny bit more, and perhaps smooth out the shading along the flank more <span style="">01:41, 3/15/2017

Reuploaded Thanks! Shypaw11 (talk) 03:27, March 15, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Smooth out the shading some more, and define the shading on the chest area. Maybe recede the earpink a little bit, because it looks like it's creeping onto her head :P <span style="">13:37, 3/15/2017

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 22:46, March 15, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Define the chest shading, and smooth it out everywhere else some

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 23:58, March 15, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

In your light source, the chest would be all in shading :P close! <span style="">00:53, 3/16/2017

Reuploaded :P Shypaw11 (talk) 01:10, March 16, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the edges of the chest, and also, smooth the open a little :)

Reuploaded :) Shypaw11 (talk) 00:23, March 17, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11(talk)

CBA? wonderful job! <span style="">13:13, 3/17/2017

Super sorry to break your CBA, but the shading at the top of the --> shoulder and the flank could be smoothed out a bit more, as they seem pretty sharp and there's not much depth there. Also, the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the <-- side of the belly. To match the kit image, the stripes shouldn't go so far down on the front paws, and at least a few would go all the way across on the tail. Additionally, define the facial markers on the sides of the face to match, and the ones on top should be less squiggly and more straight like the kit's.

Where did the pale chest go? It needs pale parts to match. <span style="">14:24 Fri Mar 17

Add more texture. And the texture here has much thicker lines than the other image, I think. Smudge the ear pink. 16:49, March 17, 2017 (UTC)

@Sunjaw, the pale chest in under the shading. <span style="">19:15, 3/17/2017


 * It could still be lightened though, as it looks the same as the rest of the pelt. And the shading is leaking on it. 19:23, March 17, 2017 (UTC)

The pale isn't the correct color. It needs to match the kit image. This looks like it is just the base desaturated a little bit, and on the kit it is clearly an orange-brown and not that dark and desaturated. Not trying to be rude, but it really doesn't even match. <span style="">22:29 Fri Mar 17

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 23:28, March 17, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

The flank and --> leg shading actually seemed to get more sharp with the last upload. Can you smooth it out?

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 23:44, March 17, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Can you smooth it out some more? I can tell the difference, but only just a little..

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 17:09, March 18, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Smooth out the shading on the face, < paw, and the tail some more, and define the shading depth. <span style="">18:10, 3/18/2017

Reuploaded Shypaw11 (talk) 18:21, March 18, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Can you smooth out the shading on the ---> front paw, and the flank and tail? In the last upload, it seemed to get sharper in those spots.

Reuploaded --Shypaw11 (talk) 18:30, March 18, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

If she's a tabby, shouldn't she have stripes on her back too? Correct me if I'm wrong. Also, I know the chest is in shading, but it really doesn't match the other image imo. Second opinion? 04:27, March 19, 2017 (UTC)

Im having a hard time seeing the light anywhere, define that please. Also it matches just fine. As the stripes are only on the legs, face, and tsil on the kit image. <span style="">12:17, 3/19/2017

To me, the image looks a tad dark, or not exaxtly the same color. Ignore me if it looks fine lol. Rainbowmistake (talk) 12:24, March 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

Crap, ignore the image brightness thing, because my phone was not bright enough fml lol <span style="">12:48, 3/19/2017

No, there really is something going on with the brightness/colors. I've looked on 3 different screens on max brightness and it looks off. A few things. The stripes look like they fade off instead of going all the way down to match the kit on the legs/tail. The chest still looks like it is just a desaturated version of the base, so either your base is off or you still haven't gotten the right color for the chest. Make sure you are color picking from the lightest areas on the kit, as it looks like you have been pulling the colors from either a shaded area or the texture. There also really should be light on the chest no matter which side the light is coming from... <span style="">15:41 Sun Mar 19

Reuploaded I use the Burn tool for my shading, so of course it's going to look dark. I lightened it anyway, though. --Shypaw11 (talk) 16:44, March 19, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

The pale chest still needs definition; I can't see it and it doesn't match the kit's, either. 01:35, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I colorpicked from the kit so it matches. It's going to look dark because of the shading, though. And sorry if I was rude, Sunjaw. --Shypaw11 (talk) 01:55, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Smooth the top part of the chest a tad, and add some more shading depth to the chest overall.

The shading on the front right paw and face still look sharp to me, mind smoothing it out? Also, I don't see any shading in his right ear, if there is could you darken it just a tiny bit? ~Patch   feather~   13:44, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste all round it. 13:54, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Shypaw11 (talk) 16:39, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Smooth out the tail and head shading some more. Also define the texture everywhere, as I can only make it out in a few spots. <span style="">01:49, 3/21/2017

Reuploaded --Shypaw11 (talk) 02:05, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

So smol and cute! I can't really make out the stripes on the tail Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 12:05, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Smooth out the paw shading just a tiny bit more, and give the chest some depth in shading, as right by the base of the chest would be darker shading. <span style="">12:44, 3/21/2017

Reuploaded These blanks are so adorable! --Shypaw11 (talk) 16:17, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

im a little confused? I'm not sure if it's just me, but I cant make out the stripes under the shading on the tail? Do you have it on the same layer or something? <span style="">19:54, 3/21/2017

Yes. --Shypaw11 (talk) 19:56, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Do you have the whole image on the same layer? If so, I highly recommend against it, as it's much easier to have everything on separate layers. As for the tail, do you think you could separate those two layers, as we need to see the stripe pattern under the shading there. <span style="">19:59, 3/21/2017

Reuploaded I don't know how to use a separate layer. And yes, it's all on one layer. I tried to make two, so please tell me how I did! --Shypaw11 (talk) 20:12, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Since you said earlier that you're using GIMP, I think I can help with that. Just right click > Dockable Dialogs > Layers. Then, that'll open the layers menu. From there, you can make layers by either right clicking in the window and selecting 'New Layer' (if using a Mac), or by clicking the page + symbol at the bottom of the window (if using a PC). Then, you can order your layers and change their settings from there. On another note, for the tail, I still can't see the patterning very well.

Reuploaded Thanks Spooky! How's this? --Shypaw11 (talk) 22:22, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Theres waste around the head and tail. Also smooth out the tail shading just a touuuuch more <span style="">23:16, 3/21/2017

Reuploaded :) --Shypaw11 (talk) 23:59, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

Im gonna be that guy and say this looks fantastic! CBA? <span style="">13:38, 3/22/2017

Sorry for breaking the CBA but I can't see the stripes on the face (cheek?) that the kit image has. 19:20, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Give a bit more shape to the face shading and smooth out the tail shading a little

Still can't tell about the lighter chest. 23:26, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Hayberry (Queen) - For Evaluation
First image ErmineGlow (talk) 22:44, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Don't align images. Also, define the shading on the stomach. 22:50, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

there shouldn't be eyelashes. 22:53, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

How come the <- ear has a rip in it? 22:54, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading looks a little flat on the belly. Shypaw11 (talk) 22:57, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I don't know how that rip happened, but it's fixed. Plus the eyelashes and belly shading.

There is still some black in the ear from where the rip was. Shypaw11 (talk) 23:10, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I blurred and smudged it to remove. Does it look better? ErmineGlow (talk) 23:14, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere <span style="">23:21, 3/06/2017

Reups Darkened shading ErmineGlow (talk)

I think you need to give your shading more shape, as these are supposed to represent 3d images, making it look real, so to speak. Instead of just plopping the shading on the tail and the legs as you appear to be, try only putting the shading around the edges of the legs/tail/etc., like some of the images on here. The apprentice tutorials help as well, and it's good to look at shading placement <span style="">23:28, 3/06/2017

Reups I tried to follow the shading placement image, so hopefully this is better. ErmineGlow (talk)

The lineart is blurred by where the ear tear and eyelashes were. 23:59, March 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Look better? --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:34, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit 00:41, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:47, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Don't forget your signature. Also, smooth out the shading <span style="">00:46, 3/07/2017

Reups Better? --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:53, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

A little! Smooth out the shading on her tail, define the light on her legs as well <span style="">00:55, 3/07/2017

Add some shading where her chest is, and darken the shading on her tail just a tiny bit. BlazeclawXAshfall Tails Entwined in Fanfic (just realized that i was shipping myself with ashfur XD) 1:11 3/7/17

Reups Tried to smooth out the shading, and also darkened the shading at the tip of the tail. --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:16, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Try to use a darker color for the shading, because it appears that the shading is the same color as the pelt.

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 03:50, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, it looks like a square on the flank <span style="">03:54, 3/07/2017

Reups Better looking? ErmineGlow (talk) 03:57, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

That looks more appropriate as the color for the shading. Try and lower the opacity and blur it more to smooth it out.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 13:41, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Round out the shading on the flank, as it looks a little blocky the way it is now. Also, define the mottles on the paws, face, and --> side of the tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:22, March 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more everywhere, define the light on the hidden back leg, and switch the shading on the farthest from us front leg to the other side of the leg <span style="">00:11, 3/08/2017

I think the shading is a bit too dark. Lighten the opacity a bit. Also, try to add some eye depth. BlazeclawXAshfall Tails Entwined in Fanfic 00:19 3/8/17 UTC

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:03, March 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading a lot <span style="">23:35, 3/08/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:41, March 8, 2017 (UTC)

Your shading on the face says the light is coming from the right, coming up a little. But your chest has shading close the lineart. o.O Is this supposed to be there? If not, erase that, because it would contradict the light source. And try to keep the light source consistent throughout the whole cat. Also deepen the eye depth. I think there's some there. . . ? Shine!  Beneath the Starlight

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:30, March 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth? Broken_Foot Slice Of The Crow's Talon 01:45, March 9, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:35, March 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the flank shading Broken Slice Of The Loved Crow's Talon 06:08, March 9, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reups ErmineGlow (talk)

There's leaking shading around the very edges or the image, plus you need to smooth out the tail shading a lot more. <span style="">15:28, 3/09/2017

The shading looks square on the belly Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 22:04, March 9, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 22:21, March 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the mottled pattern on the --> side of the tail -- It looks like there's very little there.

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 22:21, March 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the stomach and legs, and smooth it out on the tail. 00:17, March 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:35, March 11, 2017 (UTC)

What are you doing for smoothing out the shading? I dont see any differences between any of the revisions for the tail shading. To "smooth out" shading, use the blur tool on the edge of the shading, not the shading itself. <span style="">00:57, 3/11/2017

Reups Does it look better now? --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:18, March 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth it more please, and there's still shading leaking around the edges of the image. Define the shading on the legs minus the one hidden under the belly, define the light on the leg under the belly, the lineart is blurry by the < earpink (im assuming it's the eyebrow whisker), and there's what appears to be a white-ish color on the edge of the earpink on the forehead that shouldn't be there. Also, define the eye depth. <span style="">19:49, 3/12/2017

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 20:47, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

Shading'a leaking all along the tail. 21:02, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:43, March 12, 2017 (UTC)

You still need to add the light on the hidden back leg under the belly. Switch the shading on the front leg closest to us to the other side of the leg please. Shading is leaking all along the belly and head. <span style="">17:35, 3/13/2017

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 18:39, March 13, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten and smooth the belly shading, you still have not added light to the leg under the belly, and define the light on the < front leg <span style="">18:46, 3/13/2017

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 19:08, March 13, 2017 (UTC)

Too much light on the leg under the belly, define the shading there. Still define the light on the < front leg <span style="">14:16, 3/14/2017

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 17:43, March 14, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the belly shading <span style="">01:42, 3/15/2017

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 14:54, March 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the darker mottles/parts on the <-- side of the tail

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 23:42, March 15, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like in some spots on the tail the shading is pixelated? like fuzzy static. <span style="">00:54, 3/16/2017

I added some mottles under the tail shading. Do you think it could be that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 15:41, March 16, 2017 (UTC)

Idk it looks a lot different than your other ones, id say match the others or get rid of it. <span style="">15:43, 3/16/2017

Reups Hopefully the static is gone now. --ErmineGlow (talk) 17:11, March 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and the darker mottles on the <-- side of the tail and the belly. Also, the <-- ear lineart is slightly blurred, I do believe.

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:18, March 17, 2017 (UTC)

I believe that on the <-- side of the belly, the line art is smudged near the top 08:08, March 17, 2017 (UTC)

I can't find any smudged line art. --ErmineGlow (talk) 14:46, March 17, 2017 (UTC)

My mistake. Smooth out the shading a teeny weensy bit on the tail 19:27, March 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 19:30, March 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading, and also, even out the patterning on the <-- side of the tail. It kinda looks like a white-ish streak on my screen? Idek.

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 00:57, March 19, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading on the tail? --Shypaw11 (talk) 16:47, March 19, 2017 (UTC)Shypaw11 (talk)

It wouldn't hurt to also smooth it out on the stomach. 01:32, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:34, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

The shading on the tail is sharp, blend it in a bit? ~Patch   feather~   13:38, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:03, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, and the tail shading still looks a bit odd. You mind smoothing it out more and giving it more shape? <span style="">01:48, 3/21/2017

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:05, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups again --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:11, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading again, and define the eye depth

Hopekit (Star) - For Approval
This was declined last time because Bluebellkit was still going through CBA when I first posted it :P Hopefully it's okay to post now. -- Sh ri ke st ep!  15:54, March 18, 2017 (UTC)

This needs a reservation on the chart^^ Also, all cream cats need stripes.

Hopekit should've lived to be honest. She would have been a cute warrior :3 Mind smoothing out the shading? Lookin good! Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 17:06, March 18, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Is there color on the nose? Also, SnowedLighting is correct. All ginger, yellow, cream, etc. are supposed to have stripes. I dunno why. Shine! 🌟Beneath the Starlight🌟 18:20 3/18/17 (UTC)

There is colour on the nose. Also, that wasn't SnowedLightning. :P And please don't repeat comments, 18:22, March 18, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, what that wasn't me. If they're technically in the ginger family (like an orange-ish color, yellow, and cream), they get stripes.

Sorry. I'm one to elaborate. Also, I think my brain was a bit muddled. Probably darken up the nose. Either my computer settings are to blame, or I'm just blind.

Alrighty!!! I'll get to all this when I get home, I'm not at my computer rn XP -- Sh ri ke st ep!  02:44, March 19, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded! *sniffs* Baby's first tabby -- Sh ri ke st ep!  17:02, March 19, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded again! Got rid of waste on the tail :P -- Sh ri ke st ep!  17:03, March 19, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded again 2: electric boogaloo And everywhere else... -- Sh ri ke st ep!  17:04, March 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth some?

reuploaded! Might lighten it later... --''' Sh ri ke st ep! 18:45, March 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <span style="">14:04, 3/20/2017

Can you darken the shading a wee bit? Its just looking a bit too light Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 16:33, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

You need to reserve this on the table, or this will be declined. <span style="">21:55, 3/20/2017


 * Nevermind, I didn't see it. You can only have one name on there sweetie, so you know for next time. <span style="">21:57, 3/20/2017

reuploaded! Sorry for the wait! --''' Sh ri ke st ep! 23:23, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit? Also don't forget your signature! :P <span style="">01:54, 3/21/2017

reuploaded! That's the first time I've forgotten! :O --''' Sh ri ke st ep! 23:23, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little bit. 14:03, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw farthest from us a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:08, March 22, 2017 (UTC)Chat

reuploaded! --''' Sh ri ke st ep! 22:12, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Mossleaf (StarClan) ~ CBA
Hopefully the alingments haven't come to haunt me again! Also, wasn't sure whether to add stripes or not, but eh Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 01:27, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Sigh. I removed the alignment. Putting '|left' means you're aligning it. Just don't put next time. Also, you didn't need to add stripes. It never specified that Mossleaf was a tabby. 01:31 3/20/17

Smooth the shading a little 01:32, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Mossleaf.star.png, and since I've already renamed it, you should only be uploading under the file I've provided for you.

Imo, and feel free to disregard if it's my monitor, but this looks mainly just blue. Can you make it a little more blue-gray, like his description? Idk, just didn't seem blue-gray-ish to me.

The shading could be lightened a bit. 02:17, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! This color took me forever to get, but I tried my best to match his description. Smoothed out the shading, but not sure if it shows Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 02:54, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Can you remove the white that's leaking onto the ears a bit? 03:03, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I was having PC problems, and it took me a while to do this Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 04:07, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded! Waste, I'm coming for you Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 19:27, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Define the shading depth a tiny bit, and smooth the shading on the very very tip of the tail? <span style="">01:55, 3/21/2017

Re-uploaded! Got lazy earlier, even though I had this finished a lot sooner, and didn't upload. Changes might not show Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 05:06, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Can you define the pupil in the <-- eye? I'm having trouble seeing it, even when I zoomed in.

Re-uploaded! I'm loving Hawkwing's Journey so far Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 21:16, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

CBA?

Kinkfur (Star) ~ CBA
Spiky cats..my loves 20:48, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

There's a speck of gray color underneath her ---> paw Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 21:16, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

I can't tell if her eyes are green or yellow, but if they are green, you should change it to yellow. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:17, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

I can tell the color of her eyes Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 21:20, March 20, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

There's a few pixels of waste under her <--- front leg 21:27, March 20, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's a leaking speck of eye color leaking out of < eye <span style="">22:00, 3/20/2017

Re-ups 19:23, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? This looks lovely~ <span style="">19:57, 3/21/2017

i'm going to be that dude but this looks a bit too dark compared to all the other images. 23:58, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-CBA? I'm pretty sure this has been re-upped, though they accidentally only commented that two sections below, though the upload history shows it so it's probably just a mistake

Yeah, I only noticed it now XD 16:28, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Snakepaw (K) ~ For Approval
This was actually really fun to make lol. Anyways, really proud of this. <3 00:39, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the texture and eye depth a teensy bit. Pretty kitty cat! ^-^ Shypaw11 (talk) 00:57, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  The eye colors are color picked from the Ro image, the eye is just tiny. XD 01:04, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

There are stripes on the face in her other images. 01:32, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 01:37, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

You need more on the forehead and they don't seem to match. Also, the apprentice is the first in the set, not the rogue. Shypaw11 (talk) 01:40, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the texture some. This is really good! <span style="">01:56, 3/21/2017

Reups Thx Winter! <3 02:00, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit 02:14, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 10:00, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

The texture on the other images is...for a lack of a better word, more profound? Darken it a bit more, and I can see that it's possibly tinted red? <span style="">12:46, 3/21/2017

it's not texture, it's part of the markings as a (bad) attempt at a ticked tabby. 14:50, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 19:14, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

possibly smudge or blur those red markings a little more? not too much though <span style="">20:01, 3/21/2017

Reups 20:04, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? 02:39, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 19:36, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Leafpaw (VS) ~ For Evaluation


Srry if this is bad but plz don't insult me -Silvershine

Please don't align your images. This needs to match the kit. This also need to be named Leafpaw (VS).apprentice.png --Shypaw11 (talk) 02:27, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

There is color leaking onto and outside the lineart, also the lineart is blurry. 02:32, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Renamed I renamed this for you to be File:Leafpaw (VS).apprentice.png. Please continue to upload under this new name, and also, take care to not re-upload under pixel blanks in the future.

(Sorry for commenting twice and I'm not sure if I'm allowed to) This needs to be long-haired and smudge the ear pink. The ear pink is also really bright. Shypaw11 (talk) 02:38, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

I added the link to Leafpaw. You need a link to all your characters. 2:41 3/21/17 UTC

That looks like my dog drew it. --Jewelpaw (talk) 02:45, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Jewelpaw, please don't insult others artwork. Anyways, smudge the black dots. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:49, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

The cat looks like he has chicken pox. CURE THE POX. Also, make the dots more realistic with your arty skills if you have sum?any? and make the ears an nose blend in that is all --Jewelpaw (talk) 02:58, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for double comment, but please add shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:59, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Again, sorry for double comment, but there is a black dot on the tail that is a bit outside the lineart. ErmineGlow (talk) 04:18, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Jewelpaw, don't be that one cat. This needs to match her kit image, and blur the black spots, smudge the ear pink, add shading, and remove some of the black leaking from the lineart. What program are you using for this? If you're using MS Paint, I recommend GIMP! It's free of charge and there's no viruses Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 04:27, March 21, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Broken, once again, please don't repeat comments. 04:32, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Refer to the tutorials, they will help. :)

This is a little too small for a normal apprentice image. Did you resize it? If so, please resize it back to its normal size. Also, this should be 'For Evaluation' since it's your first image. <span style="">12:41, 3/21/2017

Robinwing (WC) (Q) - CBA
I hate when I can't get smudged shading to look how I want and have to resort to blurring it >.< Oh well, a nice easy image. <span style="">16:30 Tue Mar 21

Can you smooth the shading on the flank, and on the <-- back leg and <-- front leg just very slightly? Nicely done^^

Reuploaded Thanks Spooky ^^ <span style="">18:08 Tue Mar 21

I think it could use a little more smoothing everywhere <span style="">20:01, 3/21/2017

Reuploaded I hate doing blurred shading >< <span style="">23:21 Tue Mar 21

Smooth out the stomach shading?

I honestly cannot get it any smoother than this. I have been blurring on 100% with a 7px brush on both layers. It made a difference the first time, but there's no more changes from it. <span style="">01:09 Wed Mar 22

Reuploaded *sigh* This is the absolute most I can do with it. I had to actually lasso select and gaussian blur it. I cannot do anything more with it. This is as smooth as it will get. <span style="">01:26 Wed Mar 22

Nah, it's alright. Blurring at that angle isn't exactly the easiest thing on the planet to do. Smudging shading is so much better but such a pain on these blanks.

Agreed. I had it smudged initially, but I ended up blurring it because I would get bombarded with comments telling me to keep defining and smoothing with how I do it. Deff doesn't help that it's a solid without texture or anything. And a light color. I learned my lesson about how people want light solids to look when I did Cloudberry's StarClan image. <span style="">01:31 Wed Mar 22

I feel like the right eye pupil is in a funny position, but ignore me if it's actually fine and my eyes are hating me right now. 01:39 3/22/17 UTC

I've used this pupil placement before. It just looks different because of the eye depth <span style="">13:00 Wed Mar 22

CBA?

Lightningpaw (A) - For Approval
All colors from the StarClan image.

Maybe add some more shading by the elbow on the tummy? <span style="">23:13, 3/21/2017

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the tail a bit? It's a little hard to see. 02:37, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Duststar (L) - For Approval
21:12, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Are the darker lines supposed to be stripes? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:15, March 21, 2017 (UTC)


 * Texture. I've used the same brush on a bunch of other chararts in the past 21:16, March 21, 2017 (UTC)
 * Okay ErmineGlow (talk) 21:22, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading and the shading on the legs and the line by the chest connected for the shoulder? <span style="">23:12, 3/21/2017

Maybe define the ear pink?

Re-uploaded 02:05, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth some 21:59, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Whorlpaw (K) - For Approval
i'm much happier with the shading this time. ~Patch   feather~   21:34, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Woah hes so adorable! it feels as if his eyes dont show pupils? but besides that he's perfectly fine!Wildthorn34 (talk) 23:38, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

I think it's just the eye color, honestly. It seems like there's pupils to me.. but then again this is such a small blank and you really don't have a lot of room to work with.

Define the shading on the ---> front leg just a tiny bit? 02:34, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''There is a pupil, just very tiny. ~Patch   feather~   12:55, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Willownose (Q) - For Approval
Eh. 00:48, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Nice Ivybreeze! Maybe define shading on hind --> leg? Ignore me if there shouldn't be any. 01:36 3/22/17 UTC

Re-uploaded. It actually should be mostly shaded, I just forgot to add it there on one of my shading layers. 02:01, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Rainstorm (A) ~ For Approval
i apologize for inactivity i have been consumed by the homework demons 02:23, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Looking good! Define the shading on the tummy? 02:32, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the eyes a bit (to match the colour better and to fit "bright") and smoothen out the haunch shading a bit. Hi cinder :) 02:39, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading/ shading depth on the chest a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:04, March 22, 2017 (UTC)Rainbow

Cloudmist (K) ~ For Approval
I'll do the ones no one cares about

Define the ear pink in the ---> ear? 15:09, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the ear pink on both the ears actually? Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 18:51, March 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Beechpaw (SC) (A) ~ For Approval


Define the scar on the muzzle and the nosepink? Very pretty! ^^ 15:12, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a little bit? 15:17, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Reuploaded tweaking something that bugged me

Thrushwing (W) ~ For Approval
this was....extremely annoying to shade 15:24, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the head shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 16:56, March 22, 2017 (UTC)Rainbow

Swallowflight (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner. Shading is kind of tricky. 19:13 March 22, 2017 (UTC)

I know lol. Can you define the shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:59, March 22, 2017 (UTC)chat

Brightwhisker (Star) - For Approval
Someday I'll end up doing a charart that's not a StarClan cat, but today is not that day. 22:09, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Not bad! Smooth out the shading on the flank,  define it a bit on the head, and smooth it out on the ---> paw Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 22:37, March 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

reups 22:54, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

The shading on the face and chest looks..almost blotchy? Is that the word for it? It looks really different compared to the other shading Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 22:57, March 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

reups I think I didn't smudge it enough the first time, I blurred it some so hopefully it looks better. 23:21, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

reups fixed some stuff that bothered me 23:26, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit on the tail and left leg, and smooth it out on right leg and the chest. 00:28, March 23, 2017 (UTC)

Duskpaw (HJ) (K) ~ For Approval
First Image. Hope you like it. Taco Cat is Awesome (talk) 22:48, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

This is really good for your first image! My first was horrendous lol. Anyways, define the shafing and smudge the ear pink. 22:52, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Danny! Taco Cat is Awesome (talk) 22:59, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

I think darkening the shading on the fur on --> side of the flank doesn't count as the entire shading on the body if that makes sense. You need a light source, and to add shading on wherever the the light source doesn't reach. You can check http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki:Charart/Apprentice_Tutorials For Help! Broken Slice Of The Crow's Talon 23:22, March 22, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Define the eye depth a little, if possible. I also think there is actually shading on the tail, legs, and face that does seem to follow a light source, but it's not very visible - it should be expanded and defined. 00:23, March 23, 2017 (UTC)