Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 66

Dark Shadow on Water - Silver Nomination
Hmm...I worked on it before, then kinda forgot about it, and tonight, out of boredom, I decided to nominate it. :3 Anyway, I added a main quote, expanded Sign of the Moon, and added regular quotes - ones that I thought described him...So, comments? o3o 02:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the article if you can. 02:14 Sat Feb 11

Also, maybe try to detail his article some more along with expanding. 21:18, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

If you can, could you choose a main quote that describes his personality just a bit more? If not, its fine. :3  18:52, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I couldn't really find a way to detail or expand it, but, I think I've found a better main quote. 04:45, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

His page looks good.

Looks good to me. CBV? 00:02 Thu Mar 1

Vote is up! 02:47 Fri Mar 2

Silverpaw (OS) ~ Silver Nomination
I managed to detail it a bit, but it's a really minor character. Comments? 09:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

History looks good. The only thing I'd suggest is that you see if you can find that quote from Rising Storm, which is obviously the only time he appears. 20:05, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Er...Sorry about that...I don't have the book, so can someone help me with that? 02:05, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Try using google books. 18:11 Sun Feb 19

Done. She isn't in Rising Storm, and I found only one quote from Secrets of the Clans. 00:52, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 04:49, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 02:54 Fri Mar 2

Talonpaw - Silver Nomination
He's always stuck out in my mind for some reason. I added quotes last night (I'll check for any others, but I don't think there are) and I'm on my way to work on Twilight. So, comments? 13:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Would it be possible to expand Starlight a little? You could explain what his patrol did when they found Brambleclaw across the border. 17:05, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Done. 22:28, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Expand Twilight more if you can. 23:48 Sun Feb 12

I detailed it. 00:39, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Looks excellent. But, was Talonpaw ever seen speaking himself? If he did actually speak, I suggest adding a dialogue quote of him speaking, because the only quotes he has are of others talking about him. 03:40, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

He never said anything. Poor thing never got a word in edgewise. o3o 01:03, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 04:49, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 21:58 Fri Mar 2

Hollowflight - Silver Nomination
Right, then, I've had my eye on him for a while now. Quotes are on the way. Suggestions? 23:40, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Expand The Forgotten Warrior, Sign of the Moon and Night Whispers if you can. Looks nice! 23:46 Sun Feb 12

Thanks, Sweet! I expanded them as much as I could. 00:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Did you get the quotes in? 04:07, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. 21:15, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I changed the main quote. No offense, but I didn't really like the other one; I have no idea why. The alternative to what I have now is, "The RiverClan cat was not the nervous apprentice she had tried to help when he first came to the Dark Forest a moon ago. He had learned a lot since then, and his movements were strong and sure." But, if no one wants that instead, I'm leaving it as is. 03:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 04:49, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 22:31 Fri Mar 2

Birdsong ~ Silver Nomination
Yay for my first nomination! 8D I expanded the history as much as possible, and added a ton of quotes. Comments? 11:53, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

The history looks pretty good, but as for quotes, I suggest you delete a few as some of them do not describe her personality. 23:16, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Which ones? Sorry, I'm horrible at picking quotes. XD 17:39, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think quotes one, two and five should be deleted. They don't really show her personality. Of course, that's just my opinion. =3 18:54, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Done. :) 12:28, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 04:49, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote is up! 22:31 Fri Mar 2