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Teller of the Pointed Stones (OTS) (H) ~ Tweaked
OA is Oblivion. 03:45, 5/19/2018

There's waste around chest, -> ear, and tail. Also, could you darken the shading overall a bit, smooth the belly shading, and add some shading to the top of the tail, back paw, and the space between -> front leg and the back leg

Fixed. I won't put shading on the tail tip, around that area, because I'm using the original source. 04:56, 5/19/2018

Ah ok. I'm still seeing a few pixels of waste by the chest, and the space between the front legs, at the top, could you smooth that shading?

I know it's probably the mud, but I'm still having trouble seeing the shading overall. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 15:58, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the shading fine.

Fixed. Not much I can do for the shading between the front legs, it's on the original file, which I don't have. 18:41, 5/19/2018

I'm sorry to argue but it showed up when you tweaked it and it's very sharp and dark. Are you sure you didn't add any shading there?

Turns out I did, but even without my shading addition it was there. 07:09, 5/20/2018

Bramblestar (D) - Redone
I will be redoing the stripes. 14:13, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Actually no I will not be. They match the leader just fine. 14:23, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot. Define it on the head and define the lighting on the back leg closest to us. Looks great, as always. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 14:26, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Should I lighten the arm shading more? 14:34, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe just define the light on it. Also the scar placement doesn't seem to match the warrior or leader, it should be pointing towards the chest

Re-uploaded: I redid the stripes to match Hawkfrost's deputy. 21:28, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (W) - Redone
OA was Mount Everest, with a tweak done by Spooky and Vec. Redone so stripes all match. 15:43, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

White chest shows more in the stripes and the 2 pixels near the chest need to be transparent. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 15:44, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:28, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Bramblestar (A) - Redone
15:45, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Isn't this just a tweak? And there's waste around the chin/chest area, and all of the paws

Icy, did you upload? o.O I'm not seeing it in the file history.

Re-uploaded: be quiet everyone this never happened  it was under the wrong filename, apparently I forgot that Bramblestar is not Brambleclaw anymore    17:55, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Ohhh hehe whoops I thought the June 2017 was what you just uploaded. Anyways shading's leaking away from the belly area next to -> arm, and I think a little bit at -> front paw and -> back paw. One pixel of waste at the top of the tail. And the stripes on this don't seem to match Hawkfrost's apprentice. Were you looking at his images or just the other Bramblestar images?

I was looking at Bramblestar's warrior, actually. If that does not match ... what should we do? 20:20, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Just matched Hawkfrost's stripes. Tigerstar's deputy will have to be tweaked. 21:28, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Clovertail (E) ~ Tweaked
21:55, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Did you tweak the color? I don't see a difference. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 22:22, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

forgot layers, its right now 22:29, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

The tint looks right, Birchstar's base color looks a tad darker though

reuploaded its pretty much indistinguishable in colour now from where I picked. 23:35, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Add the white belly. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:05, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink is not covered the way and that white line pixel on the leg is like out of place. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:07, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) ~ Tweaked
Recent OA is Raelic. <span style="">22:05, 5/19/2018

There are a few spots of the old color: back of the neck, chest, and a few pixels above the bellyish area between the front and back leg. There's also waste by <- front paw

This base should be lighter to match Birchstar. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading? Color tweaks sometimes get rid of shading or make it appear non-existent.

Fixed. Idk what to do about the color. <span style="">18:27, 5/20/2018

Heavystep (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color

This should be the base of Birchstar's leader. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what else I can do. The shading on this is much darker than the apprentice, so it seems too dark, but the lightest color on this (like the face) does match Birchstar's leader (If anything it's too light)

The color I have compared to this is very different. <span style="">09:30, 5/20/2018

Define the shading.

Heavystep (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color

This one seems lighter than the other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:04, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes it seems that way. The elder was darker than the other ones before I think because of the shading. I colorpicked the base color of both and the apprentice is actually a little darker than the elder. So should I leave it since the base color is basically the same, or darken it because overall the image looks lighter? I'm not sure Actually, I'm not going to darken it because the color of this is the same as Birchstar

I believe he should match- so maybe make it darker. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:18, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Is it the same color base as birch's leader? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes

Define the shading. The color tweak now makes it look flat.

Flowerstar (K) ~ Tweaked
OA was Hawkmask. Tweaked by me to remove the patches on the <-- leg and the belly...I think? 00:13, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes I think that's right. Maybe just smooth out the bottom of the chest patch where you edited it

I don't see what you're talking about, Snowfall? Needletail 🐾#Litten 05:19, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Well it used to be one big patch that covered the belly, and went down <- leg, but those parts were removed, and now the bottom of the patch seems a little hard-edged imo

I don't see it either. It doesn't seem any more hard-edged than the rest of the pattern. Doesn't mean it's not there, though. Vec, humor me and zoom in and see if you can find it.

Reups Or I'll just add a little more white and blur it some more ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Is that better? 18:27, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to darken to match Firestar. OA was Scarletwind. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 15:32, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Redone to match stripe pattern. I had the file so I only tweaked the stripes. Tbh I don't know how I did the design. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 16:05, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Jake (KP) - Tweaked
OA is me, and I just stole Firestar's base coloring. Please do not ask me to change the stripes. I was quite proud of them when I made this image, and I'd rather keep them that way.

Echosong (Star) - Redone
OA is me. Redone for stripes. 19:00, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Hoot (L) ~ Tweaked
OA is me, to smudge patches a lil' more to match the other images better