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Dapplepelt (ES) - For Approval
23:54, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups just realized I forgot to smudge a few markings 23:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the markings some more please 00:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a tad? oh dang I want this but this is so beautiful 01:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reups Thanks Fox 09:58, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There should be thinner and a greater amount of stripes. I also think her patches are paler than this. 10:11, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

theyre not paler, theyre duller. 11:43, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

'reups I use highlights, that;'s why the color's brighter. I dulled them down a bit though. 15:35, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Can you shrink the amount of white from her belly. It doesnt go that far down on her other images 02:53, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:23, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the white paws? 13:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Indeed I can 17:50, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

This is hot. Blur the haunch shading a lil bit? 19:04, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I really should label my layers, I keep smudging the black instead of the shading >_> 20:45, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the facial shading just a little? 08:55, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reups 22:58, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you dull the paches a little more Belllastar (talk) 01:00, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'd rather not, unless I absolutely have to. The only way to do that is turn off the highlights completely, which is the only thing making it look brighter. 08:57, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Well, do you need the highlights? It is kind of throwing the color off, but if the image doesn't look like what you wanted it to look without the highlights, then I don't suggest you to remove them. 09:23, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't need them, no, but I've used them on literally every other image I've made (not counting tweaks) and haven't had to turn them off, even though some of them are much brighter than this. Plus, at least on my screen, the color looks almost exactly the same as the ancient tribe image, which is the on I picked the color from. Plus, turning them off makes a pretty minimal difference :/

Sorry for being stubborn. 18:07, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can barely see a difference at all, honestly. I think the colors are fine as they are. o.o

If anything, you should match the MC in terms of color, not the ancient, as I'm pretty sure the MC was first. 04:18, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

But it does match? If anything, it might be the shading or highlighted areas that make it look like it doesn't match.

Get rid of the white 20:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Also waste between the front legs 18:24, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 11:25, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

yep, wii stopped working for me for some reason. It works on Safari apparently, though. weird.... 01:25, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 01:43, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

I feel really bad about this, but since I was the person who designed the pattern and she was nominated while this was up, I was planning on making the white patches colored so that it's not "white" while still not changing the pattern...I had no idea this was even up and would have said something before but I didn't want it to have to get tweaked right after approval, is there anyway you could do that? I'm going to work on it right now  02:11, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, sure thing, is this what you meant? 11:16, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

And now you'll need to add some brown to this. It was suggested on the tweak page, that way the color blends... or something like that.

Dappled Pelt is an orange-and-white tortoiseshell in MFV, do you think you could fix that? 12:26, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

so... do I just put the white back? 08:44, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

went ahead and put the brown on I'll add the white when MFV is released and it's cited on her page. 13:27, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

i'm pretty positive orange-and-white means mainly that, so I would just dull down the amount of other colors. also theres waste around the paws 14:04, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

waste on the paws 12:50, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

fox i already said that 13:15, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Jagged Peak (Alt ES) ~ For Approval
wow he's adorable. Belllastar (talk) 13:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Did you forget the earpink? lol. Thicken the shading on the main body; nice job! 14:11 Sat Oct 24

Define the light on the legs and tail. 14:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ya I did and I struggled with tail shading, but i will try again --Belllastar (talk) 14:19, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define overall shading. 14:46, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups what do you think of the crippled foot, and can somebody fix the link to his page Belllastar (talk) 15:32, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front legs/chest a little bit more. 18:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define facial shading a bit? He gets these great images and he's so annoying, heh --Dewsplash (talk) 01:07, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:07, October, 25, 2015

I think the stripes taper a bit more on his other images. they also seem to be more hard edged and they seem to be darker. 09:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I disagree aboat the stripes but i'm fixing the shading right now Belllastar (talk) 13:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Fff I was looking at the wrong image. Lease define the shading depth. 14:27, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

And could you define the light on the front legs, maybe? 23:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes just a tiny bit. Also define the light on the chest and face, if that's not already been said (I'm kinda tired and can't focus). Also, define the ear pink- it's pretty much all in shadow, I think, and I can't see it at all.

No date on this. Declining. 20:58, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please don't decline this I worked so hard, I reserved this on october 21st 2015, I am sorry I thought that was for tweaking only and this I my second charart, please cut me some slack, if you decline this I am going to cry! --Belllastar (talk) 22:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Bell it has to be declined because you didnt put your reserve date down, and that's part of the rules. 22:50, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

can I re-claim it then and add the date again (I realy was proud of this guy and wanted to see it be approved) --Belllastar (talk) 00:09, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Since its declined you have to wait 2 weeks to reclaim it, so someone could have a chance to try it. --Dewsplash (talk) 00:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 00:15, October, 29, 2015

then can I tweek the art and do his non crippled image, or do I have to-redo it --Belllastar (talk) 00:29, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Only warriors and above are allowed to tweak images 00:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I know I meen can I use the same art, just redo his foot for the non-cripled versoin --Belllastar (talk) 00:40, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to wait 2 weeks to reclaim, that's only on images declined for the one month limit, and yours wasn't. I'm not sure how long the waiting period is, though. 00:56, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

It's nonsense that you have to wait for two weeks. That's only if its declined due to the one month limit. You can re-reserve this right away. 00:58, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Yay!! --Belllastar (talk) 01:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups thanks to Burntclaw and Icebreeze (luv your user names) --Belllastar (talk) 01:24, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I still think more light could be added to the face and chest. Perhaps either erase some of the shading there, or add a new layer of highlights? (for highlights I suggest setting the layer mode to overlay, then drawing white onto the areas where the light hits) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:17, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Added hylights all over (I just learned how) --Belllastar (talk) 02:50, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Add light to his chest 13:43, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink and its shape- I can't see it at all. I've also renamed this to File:Jagged Peak.es.alt... I'm pretty sure he gets another image without the broken leg..? I think? Please reupload under the proper filename now.

The chest is fine Its meant to be dark. --Belllastar (talk) 16:41, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

There should still be a little light there, with this source. Also, define the earpink just a tad 22:42, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Can I use the same file if I do the Non crippled image or do I have to redo it? --Belllastar (talk) 22:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Redthistle (Star) - CBA
So pretty, so much fun to do :o I feel like I butchered the design... 20:20, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her a little bit? She's gorgeous --Dewsplash (talk) 20:57, October 24, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 20:57, October, 24, 2015

Nice. :) Do you want the file for the med cat? I can send it if you like. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 21:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 22:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Thanks (: I removed a very low opacity highlight layer I had and turned the 3rd shading layer on the tail back on. And yes the file would be very appreciated! My email is danielle.j.palmer95@gmail.com (not my main one so I don't really care if its seen) 01:01, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lets see... The way you smudged the main pelt makes it look like her body is a flat sheet of paper covered in fur. Could you possibly curve the way you smudged it a bit, and make it flow with he body more? I'm sorry if that sounded rude. 03:26, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Ugh. So I lost the original file I had for it so I had to redo it. Color picked from med cat, and attempted to match it better after looking at it without shading. I will probably redo the main body markings within the next couple days >.< 20:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the main body? This is so gorgeous *.* ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:28, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

reupped ^^ And this is how far the shading really goes. I darkened it so it would be a little more obvious but the way I do shading can sometimes make it look a bit odd or seem receded ^.^ 00:44, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading? Gorgeous job! Sagestream (talk) 23:12, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Thank you^^ And I am a bit reluctant to lighten it any more than this as it is starting to become harder to see and I will most likely be told to define it. Not every image has to have super light shading, and on a lot of the body this affected it quite a bit on my screen |: 03:00, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think the shading could still stand to be lightened. I'm looking at this image on my iPad, which is the main device I rely on color displays. Right now, with this darkness, I cannot see the pattern through the shading at the least. I suggest lightening it by 5%-10%, whichever works for you. If the shading does look hard to see, it's because it's not expanded enough. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:23, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

reupped 20:37, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 01:57, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Birch (ES) - For Approval
Ok, so, I had to use another computer to upload this, mine's acting weird. It looked like it matched better on my computer... so idk. 00:02, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Would you like the file? Also, his eyes are hazel [yellow-green], rather than green. 00:14, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changed the eye color, also fiddled with the stripes and shading. Thanks for the offer, but I'd like to do this without the file, if possible. 00:46, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still seeing green eyes... Can you also define main body/belly shading? Lovely =3

Re-uploaded 15:06, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

This is gorgeous. CBA?

Sorry but i think the chest shading could be smoothed a bit more. 01:56, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

and expanded 05:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Waste between the front legs 18:20, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:16, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 03:39, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

diffine shadeing Belllastar (talk) 19:34, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. 19:35 Thu Oct 29

i agree with bellastar. 19:36, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 12:22, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry to break the CBA again sorry icebreeze >< but in MFV (i have the book) Birch has white rings of fur around his eyes. 12:27, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Well, I'm not sure, is that a spoiler since the book hasn't been released yet? I can just hide the layer of white if I need to remove them. 15:18, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Its not really a spoiler if its in the allegiances. Plus itd be best to say it while theyre up on the approval page so you dont have to do an unneccesary tweak later 16:29, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Should I revert what I did to this image, as per the discussion on the talk page? 20:46, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Daisytoe (Star)- For Approval
How do you not thumb the images, idk ;-; Anyway, here is my Daisytoe starclan

thingy ;u; Idk how to not thumb the images im so sorry DX

Sagestream (talk) 02:50, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

-- Reups - Forgot grey paws oops Sagestream (talk) 02:56, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yo, this is pretty good! Maybe blur/smudge the shading a bit? Also, to not thumb the images, sue source mode and simply get rid of the "thumb". 03:20, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Thanks, Burnt c: Sagestream (talk) 03:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. --Dewsplash (talk) 03:37, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 03:37, October, 25, 2015

Reups Sagestream (talk) 03:41, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading and add eye depth. 03:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 04:00, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste (I think) bordering outside of the charart. Blur and define the shading some more.

Reups u.u Sagestream (talk) 04:23, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

You're uploading a different image every time. Please upload under File:Daisytoe.star.png to prevent the unnecessary deletion of images. 09:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. 12:14, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

The ears on the mickey mouse heads should be more rounded. Also, the base for the white is pure white, if that helps. (If you want the file, just ask.) 13:17, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Apologies, Burnt. it just kept popping up with the 'you have a file with this name already here' and i finally found the overwrite button... ^^' Sagestream (talk) 17:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading, please? 23:13, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 02:11, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

There's a strange darker blob on >>> that leg. Could you somehow fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:10, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

This image needs to be named Daisytoe.star.png so it works with the charart template on her page. Also, as a reminder, the next time you reserve an image, you also need to add a date. I've fixed it for you this time, but the next time, your image will be declined.

I think the shading is leaking from the lineart along the belly 17:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sagestream (talk) 02:03, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please name the file Daisytoe.star.png Like Skye told you. And the ears from the micky mouse pattern still need to be a little more rounder. Thre is also waste on her shoulder. 02:07, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups For me, it says it's name is Daisytoe.star.png.... Sagestream (talk) 02:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

-- OHH okay i found out the problem, i capitalized the 'Star' Sagestream (talk) 02:20, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The waste is still there. 02:44, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's gone?? Sagestream (talk) 03:23, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see waste... And since you know what you're doing, I'm promoting you into an apprentice. 03:25, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ok what you're already an apprentice ^^; next time put the title as For Approval 03:26, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I was a kit when I first made this image so that's why it was "For Evaluation" :p Sagestream (talk) 04:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

White's looking gray. Nice job! 05:18, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

My main pelt layer is actually pure white; maybe it's the shading? Sagestream (talk) 05:37, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the stomach we=here the tail and the elbow meets. 12:42, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see where the shading leak is..... Sagestream (talk) 23:12, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's mainly on the spot where the tail and the main body intersect, and it's leaking away from the belly too. I hope that helped! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:38, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I think i got it. ;u; Sagestream (talk) 02:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Went ahead and fixed an alignment for you. ^.^ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:15, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still see leaking shading on the belly. 13:42, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 18:20, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Don't align your images. Can you brighten the white on the main body? It's looking a little gray. Also, smooth out the tail-tip shading. 20:50, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

reups I can't really brighten the main white, it's pure white Sagestream (talk) 21:19, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

then thin out the shading 09:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the face seems to be just a strait blurred line (ha, blurred lines) Mind curving it a bit so it looks more realistic? 12:29, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re ups  u.u Sagestream (talk) 04:42, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (ES) ~ CBA
I'm really not happy with this but eh 19:57, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading; I can barely see it. 20:06, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading near wear the chest meets his front left leg. 18:58, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. 15:53, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait, I've been really busy with school. 21:02, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 09:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Juniper Branch ~ CBA
C'est horrible 15:46, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the shading? Sagestream (talk) 22:21, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think brightening shading on a cat like this is actually going to be possible or do it justice. It's dark navy-black shading, and the cat has a near-black base. If you meant 'lighten', I also don't think that'll do much for it because I'll be told to define it again what with the dark base. 00:22, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Please do lighten the shading. I cannot see the pattern underneath it. 14:34, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink more? (if needed?) I love this so much <3 wish I can shade black cats properly D;

Reups I only lightened it five percent, because otherwise I couldn't see it. Also, at the start I used a lighter black to see the lineart better - I forgot to put the real colour back at the end, so I've done that. Also, changes are here 16:40, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

This is just a suggestion, not a critique that you should feel obligated to follow, but maybe you could add another layer of shading where the shadows are a lot thinner and sharper to indicate the areas of deepest shadow? That way you get the best of your original vision and what other users are compromising? Again, entirely optional, I just find it helps the muscles pop a little more! 02:44, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups tried and failed... 14:30, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry about this Sorrel >< but in MFV Juniper Branch is said to be long-furred. Could you fix that? 12:28, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Are you serious? >.< I prefer this short-haired. Fine, I'll do it later. 13:26, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reups god I hate this so much more now 14:25, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste on the back and tail, between there. Very pretty. --Dewsplash (talk) 14:30, October 31, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 14:30, Octobet,31, 2015

Reups 14:35, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the pattern follow the long-furred blank? Because at the shoulder there is a marking that is leaking onto the chest, and it looks unnatural. 22:06 Sat Oct 31

Reups 16:40, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 03:27, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Alder (ES) ~ For Approval
Snowfall-girl ^^ 18:13, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

The entire pelt is supposed to be flecked in white, and there shouldn't be any large patches of gray.

Re-ups 23:33, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the shading everywhere. 08:29, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 12:23, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink more? (if needed?) I love this so much <3 wish I can shade black cats properly D;

Comments? 12:18, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a little bit, please? It's mainly on the face, but it kinda makes the white on the face blend in a little too much.

Re-ups 12:32, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

In MFV Alder is described as a brown, gray-and-white cat in the allegiances. im not sure if that warrants an alt or to put with the original image 12:31, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Now she looks muddy :p 16:03, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think it should be an alt... the previous books all said she was gray and white and they came first. But I'm not entirely sure

this shouldn't have the brown yet. not to mention its not an alt, it still includes her current description. 17:31, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think the brown is a partial, but MFV isn't out yet so it doesn't count. 22:05 Sat Oct 31

add the brown 00:56, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can someone revert it to the brown version?I can do nothing in my phone :p 12:30, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Done 12:34, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Flashnose (Star) ~ For Approval
I'm so happy Doestar was approved! I decided to do Flashnose this time, to challenge myself with a tabby pattern. I don't think I done the stripes any good, and any .xcf files would be very appreciated! Comment away. ^.^ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:41, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm.... I have the file for the queen, I just need to find it. Would you like it? 03:56, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Never mind, I lost the file, sorry. As for the image, try and add more stripes. Nice. 05:41, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much! I'm sorry you lost the file, but I think I can cope without it for now. I added more stripes to the flank and head. Hopefully now this looks better than the previous version. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:28, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be more smudged, but that's just me. Very pletty by the way!

Define the shading on the face. Very Nice~ 22:38, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main part of her body. so gorgeous :o 23:50, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you guys so much <3 I expanded the shading on the main body and face, so hopefully you can all see it better. I also smudged the stripes a little more. :) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:22, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Would you like the file for the warrior? There's several markings hidden by the shading that you're lacking right now, and I'm sure it'll help with colors and stuff too! 01:35, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The white seems to go up a little bit higher on the other images. Nice job! 05:11, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks a ton! @Rainlegs: I think I'm ok actually, I'll just observe the marking a little more and fix them up in the next upload. For this upload, I expanded the white on the muzzle. I think the queen is the side I have to match? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:11, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tall stripes appear to be over smudged- please sharpen them 12:22, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

That's okay! The only major thing is that her spine has three stripes instead of just the one all the way down it (or at least two on the warrior, in theory there should be three for symmetry). There's brighter orange patches mixed in the stripes too here or there, and the white on the muzzle doesn't go as far out on the face as you currently have it stretched; it should stick just to the muzzle. 02:11, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I won't be able to upload for a few days >< I've got so many rehearsals going on for a school play. Is it ok if I hold this for 3 days? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:14, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've finally managed to get the time to re-upload this before I go to bed. (those rehearsals were sure tedious) I've added a second dorsal stripe and sharpened the tail stripes. If this doesn't look better to you, I apologize as I am extremely exhausted. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:12, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

You forgot to fix the white, I think 06:55, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry about that >< I managed to sneak onto Warriors Wiki during break time, and I shrunken the white. Hopefully this looks better. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:04, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Are changes not showing? because I see no change...

Re-uploaded How did the image not save itself? O.o I re-saved it and hopefully this shows ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 04:05, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes ES- CBA
Hello yes it's been a while since I've done any original art for the site, so I started easy with a solid! I've learned a few new things from Sai, I don't use GIMP anymore. Thoughts or critiques? (I also need a new signature holy hell)  07:28, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't texture on the kit, I believe. I think the light on the legs could be expanded too. Great job on this! (Those big eyes *.*) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:34, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't believe that's texture; I think that's how his shading and highlights are, Blossom.

Well I did give him a teeny tiny bit of texture, I thought he looked a tad bit flat without it and I thought it was artist's choice but I can remove it! 07:40, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Images have to match though, I think you should remove it, also, he's looking green... 07:51, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge or blur the ear pink more? It just looks a tad hard edged ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:13, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I have no way to smudge ear pink in Sai, if anyone who uses Sai has any tips on how to help me do that I would appreciate it  22:46, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix the ear pink when a fellow Sai-nenite can help explain how to give the earpink the apperance of being smudged  02:35, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

It seems to me that one eye is lighter than the other - is that intentional or is it an error? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:25, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

His highlights appear green to me. -- 20:29, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Well they shouldn't be since they're tinted blue, and no I used the same colors for both eyes  00:44, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest, I agree with Zootvine. The highlights do look a little green to me. Maybe pick a highlight color that leans more towards white, if possible. While you're at it, could you expand the light on his back legs? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:14, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

He doesn't look green?? O.o 13:20, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

He actually kinda does 13:37, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

HOnestly, I dont know where you guys see the green lol, I cant find it on him :P   Smooth out the shading on his tail too <3 13:39, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Also, why do I feel that the eyes are two different colors? 06:54, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

He actually does look green. 00:10, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing the green at all, his shading is tinted yes, but it's not green. It's a very light blue set on overlay. His eyes are also not two different colors, that's how I shade them, and one eye has a little bigger of a light area because it's more in the light than the other. If you don't believe me zoom in on it. 03:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, he still looks green, can you please try and find some way to fix that? Also can you smooth out the shading in general. 01:58, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still never saw it but I changed the highlights to pure white  and erased a little bit of the highlight in the eye 02:39, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I guess blue highlights could clash the colors. CBA? 03:26, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

River Ripple (Cotp) - For Approval
Don't comment on shading, I'm gonna define that. Also River Ripple is second best cat. 20:59, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are darker than on his other images. Agreed. He is awesome 23:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a little too blurry - but, you don't need to change it. Beautiful job. Sagestream (talk) 23:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I can redo the stripes if you want, I'm not super happy with them either. 03:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

blur the stripes a tad more. 03:48, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten them Belllastar (talk) 11:19, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on his tail. Could you sharpen the stripes, too? 16:00 Thu Oct 29

the white pixel is the blank in general, i'll get to that. but right now, i'm confused. do you guys want me to blur the stripes or sharpen them? i'm getting confusing comments. -appledash who cant signature on the school computer b/c she cant find the little key to do it with

Ignore the latter part of my comment(Where it's crossed out). 22:16 Thu Oct 29

Re-uploaded: 00:20, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading on <== that leg 09:08, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Fix the area above the tail on his hind leg, it looks like the shading was accidentally blurred/ diluted. 18:49, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Add/define belly shading? -- 20:27, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 21:00, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the leg to our right. Maybe try adding another layer of thinner shading to fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:15, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 18:32, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking on the tail ouo 02:58, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 07:36, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add more dempth to chest shading? --Dewsplash (talk) 00:11, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 01:23, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

add light to the legs 08:50, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I didn't totally just lose the file to this. <_< 22:46, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Sun Shadow (ES) - CBA
black cats for halloween 00:56 Thu Oct 29

Casually renames. It should be File:Sun Shadow.es.png. Capitalization is everything.

Blur the shading. 00:21, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. 00:38 Fri Oct 30

i dont think thered be shading on his back. 10:35, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. 19:12 Fri Oct 30

Blur the shading some more, please. 22:10, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:46 Tue Nov 3 CBA? 11:21, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Houndstar (star) ~ For Approval
I just made stealth's beautiful pattern look bad ;; 09:52, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Those beautiful eyes *.* there's an unblurred brown patch on his ear 10:06, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  10:09, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Add a bit more depth and define to the shading? --Dewsplash (talk) 01:37, October 30, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash,01:37, October, 30, 2015

I don't think the brown on the leader is as blurred as you have it on here...

Do you need a headshot of the leader Bramble? I used highlights and shading over everything except for the lineart. I didn't blur, I used a smudge tool, soft brush. Trying using that and it should match better. (oh and you'll probably need to smudge a bit to get it right) 06:34, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Sure! Id like it. Ill try to reup as soon as I get back home. 21:22, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Here ya go! No shading or highlights, and I'm pretty sure it still looks good! 22:05, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded I hope I got everyone's stuff... 00:08, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think the patches on the leader appear to be smudged a very, very little more than how you appeared to smudge it here. If it doesn't, I apologize, I've been exhausted lately. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:17, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it matches fine, but if stealth says it needs to be smudged, I'll smudge it more. 13:07, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Just make sure it's smudged in the direction of the fur that's all. Also, the white isn't pure white, just noting. 21:10, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope people see the difference... 23:53, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a tad 23:57, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (ES) ~ For Approval
This took me so long >< I spent nearly 5 minutes on the face shading and still can't get it right ;( I'm still super proud of this though :3

I just noticed I need to match Fox's version {I had this done before posting it now} I'll catch up with that later :P

Would you like the file? The layers are quite complicated, in my knowledge. I'm sure it'll help with a lot of other stuff 23:18, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Of course Foxeh <3 Send it to nettyj.amazingurl@gmail.com please^^ That would help a lot!

While you're at this, maybe add some shading depth so that it doesn't look flat? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:19, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Still working, Nettle? 09:11, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Chiveclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
* sans for your soul 12:44 Fri Oct 30

I'd say the shading could be lightened some more, as I can't see any texture beneath it. Great image! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:28, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Opacity and colours were all from the MC and that passed easily. You wouldn't see the texture in shadow anyway >.> 14:44 Fri Oct 30

... Ok. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 23:20, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Berry, please calm down a little bit- they were merely suggesting a way to improve your image and there's no need express annoyance over it. As for this image, try expanding the chest shading- It appears that this cat is sitting in intense shadow and compared to the rest of the image, it looks flat. 03:36, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

still working? 13:22, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Squirrelwhisker (Star) ~ For Approval
I think the warrior has texture, but if I'm mistaken I can remove it. So proud of this! 14:10 Fri Oct 30

I'll fix the whole in the tail next upload. 14:11 Fri Oct 30

Define the texture. Also, would you like the file? The pattern is pretty hard to match. 14:55, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Yeah, the file would be useful. My email is butterflycupcakeprincess@gmail.com. 15:04 Fri Oct 30

Re-ups Thanks for the file, Blue. <span style="">17:12 Fri Oct 30

Shorten the whiskers on --> side by a few pixels. They probably should match <-- side a bit more in length...and I think the ones I asked you to shorten are a bit too long anyways.

Re-ups Now they look really awkward. I'll try to make them droopier next upload. <span style="">1:09 Sat Oct 31

Re-ups fixed whiskers. <span style="">15:18 Sat Oct 31

can you make them curve more gradually? whiskers dont usually just droop off suddenly. 20:21, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Those whiskers are the bane of my existence. <span style="">14:24 Mon Nov 2

Define the shading, please. 02:00, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Milkweed (ES) ~ CBA
Hardest thing I've ever done. Excuse me, I'm going to flip a table... -- 17:46, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. lovely dear ^-^ - Russettail13(talk) 19:05, October 30, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Nice. :) Would you like her files? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 20:08, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded; played around with the shading a bit. To be honest, I'd love the files, but I don't know how I'd get them. -- 13:39, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Jayie could email them to you :) 14:29, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

There are weird black streaks of paint on her chest, could you possibly fix that? 11:02, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 15:45, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 02:01, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (ES) ~ For Approval
Oh sheesh I love Pebbleheart <3 I've never thought much about him before the Dawn of the Clans Arc. Oh and colours from the warrior. 23:13, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and add more? <span style="">0:48 Sun Nov 1

Do you mean on the main body and tail? Most of the other stripes match the other images generally. 01:22, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, yeah. Just the main body and tail. <span style="">1:26 Sun Nov 1

Could you brighten up the white patch? Great job! 02:56, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! 03:36, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little more 06:51, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on the leg closest to us less...unnatural? Stripes don't go that way 11:19, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:01, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 00:08, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you explain in what way please. Does he need the base colour and stripes darkened to match the other images or do I need to darken the shading? 00:18, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot more; if you're not using pure white, I suggest it. Also, the stripes are much thinner on his MC... I'd say no more than two pixels wide, at the most. Many of these are much larger.

There are more y stripes on this image than there are on his mc, and the stripes are darker on the mc. 12:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:18, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes some more. 02:01, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 02:48, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

make the stripes more "pointy" and smudge the white more 13:24, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Nettle (ES) For Approval
I was so lazy on this haha... 01:22, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the legs? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Micah (Star) ~ For Approval
Best cat 2015 Pls Micah is my favorite I want all his images 00:04, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes- the color looks kinda flat.

reups 12:42, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

reups again 12:48, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

.-. 12:53, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yew Tail (ES) ~ For Approval
So when I heard his description, this is what I thought of. I may have left something out, as the book isn't released where I am. Comments? 00:45, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading and maybe expand it some more? 00:57, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. 03:38, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and could you possibly smudge where the brown and cream meet? Given that you've made him long-furred, I think the transitions could be a bit more smudgey.

Blue Whisker (Q) ~ For Approval
A queen image! 01:40, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the white more...white on her main body? 01:42, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did other stuff too 01:53, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Redone the old one irritated me so I redid it and I'm much happier. 11:19, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the white more visible? I cant hardly see any and she's supposed to be yellow-and-white 12:40, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added more white 12:47, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (ES) ~ For Approval
Honey honey honey honey bae sweetie sweetie rules

Lighten the shading a bit.. imo, I think it clashes a bit too much with the pelt.

Hes said to look exactly like his father. Would you like the file? 06:02, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Apple Blossom (Ki) - For Approval
so cute.

Re-uploaded. Accidentally used male blank and also got rid of a speck of white waste.

This is great ;0; Maybe smudge the ear pink a little? Sagestream (talk) 06:01, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Re-uploaded again as I played with the base and white.

Mothflight (Q) - For Approval
Before you go jumping in saying the colors don't match, keep in mind that the base is color picked off her other images. Also, before you go complaining about the texture, that isn't texture- it's shading. Any who, comment away. 12:07, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I posted a wrong version where the base was yellowish. 12:16, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

yknow i dont really argue against tints, but this is making her look cream. 13:09, November 3, 2015 (UTC)