Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 17

Cinderpaw - Approved
I'm not sure about the paw...Minnowclaw 01:18, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think the paw looks great! So does the shading and everything! Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:21, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

The paw looks awesome! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 01:54, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Can you add a highlight to the herbs as a final touch? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:48, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Wow, I didn't think the paw was good at all.Minnowclaw 17:21, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The bent paw needs thickened lineart, and it's bend is too sharp. Round that out, and then she'll be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:58, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

It's supposed to be her hind leg that's bent. I have a book reference on her article talk page. The warrior version is wrong too. -- Rain whisker 09 12:01, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Blackclaw is right. I also came across a reference when rereading one of the books. It is her hind leg. Bramble - what shall we do about her warrior version?? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:31, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... someone willl just have to change it, as mal hasn't been seen in the last milennia. Any calls for you could do it? I will, if no one else wants to. -- Bramble My Realm 21:36, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

I will do her medicine cat version. I just erased the leg because I couldn't get it right and it wouldn't show up on the other side in real life.Minnowclaw 22:14, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

She is a dark gray. -- Dawnfeather talk! 23:53, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

better?Minnowclaw 16:58, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Darker than that - it needs to look like her medicine cat version. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:56, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 22:52, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Still needs to be darker; it's two shades too light. Also, shade the herbs some too. -- Bramble ’-san'  21:07, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 01:39, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. Comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  02:41, September 24, 2009 (UTC) None. Approved. -- Bramble -san  02:44, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Jaypaw - Approved
I'm so fed up with the other type of tabby stripes! I tried this one, is it good?.Minnowclaw 23:31, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I love this. He is supposed to be just grey, though, and this is more like light grey/silver. I'd change him to darkish grey.  Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess |undefined 03:31, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

better?Minnowclaw 16:42, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, he looks better now that he's darker, but what happened to the tabby stripes? Icethroat21 Enter at risk 17:29, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I thought that he wasn't tabby?Minnowclaw 19:02, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - His page description is a small gray tabby tom. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:01, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

He's a tabby...--Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 15:31, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Darn it, oh well, looks like were going back to the beginning. I returned him to tabby and made him darker.Minnowclaw 17:05, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. He's a gray tabby, and that's what we've got here. Comments before approval? -- Bramble ’-san'  21:10, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... His eyes seem to dark for a blind cat. On the eclipse cover he has lighter eyes. Change that then it should be perfect. Mossflight 22:10, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 01:33, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Mossflight 01:49, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

WEEEEEEEEE YAY!Minnowclaw 02:07, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Lol. Comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  02:41, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. -- Bramble -san  02:44, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Brambleberry - Approved
Well, here's Brambleberry, my fist medicine cat. I tried adding some highlights, and I honestly have no clue how it looks. Comments?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 15:17, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

it looks like you missed a bit on the left leg? Brambleclaw14 Talk 15:49, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

This looks too gray to be a white cat. It did say she was white with black dots sand a strikingly pink nose, yes? Mossflight 22:07, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made her coat color whiter.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 21:14, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

What happened to her strikingly pink nose? :( Lol the pelt looks great now, change the nose back, and then I think she'll be ready. -- Bramble -san  21:49, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oops... I redid the whole image and forgot about the nose. LOL. How is she now?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 00:40, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me. But I probably missed something.Minnowclaw 01:25, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

She looks good to me, too. Nice job, echo. Comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  02:41, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. -- Bramble -san  02:44, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Q) - Approved
I'm taking the opportunity whilst I actually have the time to put some images up so here she is. Constructments? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:07, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Oh wow, Sandy, she looks beautiful. Nothing I can see is wrong with it. I love your tabby stripe style. :) btw, like my new siggie? -- Bramble ’-san'  21:15, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you :) I was a bit wary of trying these as they always looked so hard to do, but I guess it payed off! I love your new siggie :) What does 'Bramble-san' mean though ??? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:43, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Meh, I was watching too many a Japanese anime. :) Basically, they added -san (which means respect and other honor stuff) to the end of their leader's name. Plus I thought Bramble-san sounded cool. You can just call me Bramble as usual though. ;) Does anyone else have any comments? Or shall I start the 24 hours? -- Bramble -san  22:14, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

So have I xD. Up to 15 episodes a day -hides-... Though perhaps we could call you Bramble-sama :P. Anyways, the images is great! I love the stripes.-- Darkhallows My den 05:34, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

One thing the left ear maybe should bw pink? bur I'm new so.... "_" Brambleclaw14 Talk 05:52, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Lol :) Shruggy: I'm assuming you mean the ear on our left, not her left. If so then I'm not going to add ear pink as it wouldn't be visible from this angle. If you mean her left ear then can you expand on that please? :) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:46, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

heh I mean our left (I'm on the IRC) Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:51, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Lol Shady. But why Bramble-sama...? Anyway, comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  02:47, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

I think -sama means like an important person, or a leader. (I watch naruto a lot) -- Rain whisker 09 12:28, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

It does. I just prefer –san cause it rolls more easily off the tongue and –sama makes me think of the bad guy from one of the animes I watch. :) Image:approved. -- Bramble -san  02:44, September 25, 2009 (UTC)