Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 96

Wind (star) - Approved
Okieee I used my old shading technique for this one but it nearly ripped me off I usually dont use highlights for chars but this was just calling for them, but i think it ended with good end. , 21:21, January 2 ,2013 (UTC)

Can you blur the center of the ear pink on --> ear just a tad? Seems a little blotchy.

Also, can you smooth out the shading on and around the base of the tail? 21:32, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Also smooth it out on side resting on the ground. 22:25, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could you make her eyes match those of the leader image and queen? 00:19, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit paler, it looks too red 02:57, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded, 15:46, January 3 ,2013 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the flank; it looks a bit blotchy in places, darken the shading under the chin, and stretch the ear-pink up to the tips of the ears. 18:39, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded, 20:49, January 3 ,2013 (UTC)

Wonderful, Leafy. CBA? 18:52, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.

Firestar (Star) - Approved
Here he is. Comments? 20:22, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Thin the shading on the back, brighten the ginger, and add another stripe to the far paw. (I can send you the file for the warrior/dep or leader if you want) 20:46, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

WHY YOU BE SO EPICAL?! Define the scar where the shading get darker and maybe add some more light in the eye Stupid edit conflicts, Paleh.... >.>  20:49, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. No, I think I'll get it. Thankies cx  20:56, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

chokes on amazingness Can you blur the shading on the paws just the tiniest bit? ouo 22:30, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Satureate and lighten the stripes a bit. ouo 00:33, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

ermahgawd this is beautiful .O. Lighten the shading where the rump meets the tail. -Feather 11:58, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading by the rump is fine. 14:07, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. No Misty I can't. >:O   18:35, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded again for critiques in chat. 18:56, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

C to the B to the A? oUo 19:00, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but the pale chest isn't as textured on the other images, and it doesn't have the brighter bur dotting into it. Unless those are stripes, in that case ignore me. Also the scar on his right shoulder doesn't match the other images. x3 01:37, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

That's just shading under the neck, and a few stripes that cross onto the chest. And how doesn't the scar match? I tried to make it look older than on the leader, but other than that I don't see. 01:42, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

The scar on the leader looks brighter, and less stylized. I also don't think it should look older, because countless times cats in StarClan were described to look younger, so in my opinion if he should have the scars they should look the same. 01:46, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

My thinking was that he is described as battle-scarred in the The Darkest Hour, when he is still a young cat. For all we know, his happiest times could actually come later, when his scars are older but he's still pretty young. I'll change them if I need to, though. 01:54, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Unless cited otherwise after they're in StarClan, all scars and such should match their image before death, and that includes how old they should look. As long as they match, they're fine. And I think they look fine right now, so continuing CBA. 03:55, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.