Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Sasha (KP) - Redone
Original artist was FirePelt, and I just redid it to match the rogue image. Changes aren't showing. 01:21, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make her muzzle and the tip of her tail blend into her pelt more 03:09, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  12:01, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join? Stoneclaw33

Thicken the shading, blur it, and define the ear-pink; maybe brighten it. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 15:33, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head. Looking good, Moonleaf. 17:10, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

My laptop is needing a battery replacement, so I'll edit this when I get it back.  19:08, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and define the earpink. Also, blur the shading on the haunch. 16:18, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add one more stripe on her haunch because the stripes on her hind legs and flank go up almost to her tail base on her rogue charart. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 21:34, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yay, I'm back. 00:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The Y stripe on the front right leg is more blurred in the middle than the rest of it. 03:21, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think changes are showing. 21:22, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. 23:03, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ._. 03:09, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink and nose color stand out more. This looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink. 00:42, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:21, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

The nose seems a bit light in color, either make it darker brown or a darker pink. 02:40, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:09, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose a bit more, it looks the same color as the fur. 23:02, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ._....

I just noticed I forgot the timestamp. Here's the timestamp. 03:03, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The nose and earpink still needsto stand out a bit more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  20:57, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (TC) - Tweaked
I made him more of a sandy gray and made his white flash a bit smaller. I also re-did the shading, added depth to the eye, and fixed the ear-pink. Comments? 14:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. And could you make him the least bit more sandy? ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 21:50, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 00:39, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the shoulder; it looks like there one patch of really saturated shading. Maybe smudge the white flash to make it look furry? Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 14:47, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 19:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail, it doesn't match the shading on the body. 23:02, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's no shading on the tail, only highlights. 00:36, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, oops. Then Lighten the highlights. xD 00:40, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Put highlights on the tail. 00:48, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

There are highlights on the tail, look above. 15:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lightened highlights. Now that I look at it, I realyl don't want to make the white flash furry considering it looks like crap... 16:18, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the white flash. It does not look like crap. Look at my charart to see what crap looks like. xD 23:39, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yes it does. Wanna compare? No, jkjk xD It has no highlights 23:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the shading, I meant. xD I always say the wrong one. 00:33, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mallownose (W) - For Approval
I was in love with his stripes too much to change them, so I copied them best I could. XD He needed to be long haired. Originally by Dawnfeather I think? Anyways, changes aren't showing yet. XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 15:27, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you redden the earpink Also make the tail highlight bigger and more defined. 21:55, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

NICE! brighten the highlight on the tail -- 00:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also, maybe make the tail highlight a bit bigger. 00:43, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  20:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading at the base of the tail. 22:52, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - So many comments on the tail. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:03, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the tail is the easiest part to tweak. People keep telling me that my charart is unatural and strange-looking. How am I supposed to fix that? darken the back shading. 22:47, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - True. I just thought it was funny all the comments I had up to that point were on the tail. XP ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:21, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (W) ~ Redone
Bleh. My first tortoiseshell. I wasn't sure what colors to use, so I copied them off of Sol, hope thats okay. xD Original artist was Sandstar12, and it needed to be longhaired. I know it looks horrible, so don't waste time telling me that. :P 22:38, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

If you took the colours from sol theres one to many in there, im guessing the dark orange, get rid of it, amd blur the patches some more. 22:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, does it matter what colors it is? The definition of tortoiseshell is a cat with 3 or more colors or something, and I think it just looks like more colors because of the shading. I'll blur the patches, but I think its fine with the colors. 22:51, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It just looks reallt busy to me with 4 colours. And smudge the face white some more. 22:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but then, cats can be many different colors. xD Re-Uploaded. 22:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white and the patches a little bit. 23:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, Misty. Can you redden the ear-pink a bit more? Scarlet wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:28, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches. Pretty! 18:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Done. '''Well, it looks too busy with 4 colors, so I redid it with two. 21:54, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and its the second file, or the one with two colors. xD 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a lot like Petaldust! (not a bad thing) The flash of white on her chest is a little too pure white, darken it a tad bit. 16:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur the white flash on the chest and blur the tortoiseshell patches. 18:14, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''ITs so hard to put shading on torties! 22:24, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

YOU did this? This is amazing! Blur where the white meets the brown and black on the tail. 02:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Yes, I did this. xD 21:56, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the muzzle and chest patches slightly darker, they look sort of, bright and unnatural.<span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 22:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thats nice. I already darkenened them a lot. The changes aren't showing, but I'll upload it again. Re-Uploaded. 22:27, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black a bit, at first glance it looks almost pure blac (though I know it's not) and there's some miscolored lineart, I think mostly on the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:05, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Seriously, its impossible to get through 48 hours without a comment. 21:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Graymist (W) ~ Redone
Remind me never to do smudges like this ever again. :P Anyway, it needed to be longhair, and the original artist was Icethroat1. 04:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the forelegs and blur the shading on the flank. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I'm not going to remind you. This is beautiful! I don't think the shading on the flank needs to be blurred, but all the shading couldbe darkened and the ear pink should be defined. 18:58, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading everywhere, define the earpink. 22:38, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur again or at all after you've smudged so the smudges don't look so sharp. 23:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. To blur or not to blur.... I blurred. :P 01:01, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure which file is correct, but all of them need blurring on the tail shading and haunch. 01:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a lot. 00:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. For me, the file wasn't showing at all. 01:28, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If I blur it any more, the stripes will fade away. 14:00, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Rainstorm (W) - Redone
He needed to be long-haired and the original artist was MosspathOfSkyClan. Comments? :3 01:08, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the head highlight. 01:12, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, there aren't any highlights. xD Well, lighten the top of the head. 01:13, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shadow on the back of his front leg. 02:23, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 02:15, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I must tell you: It's amazing! Leaf-storm,20:19,September 1,2011 (UTC)

It is. xD Darken the shading on the top part of the tail. 22:52, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, it looks blotchy. 00:50, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 14:00, September 3, 2011 (UTC)'''

Sunstrike (A) - Redone
She needed to be short-haired, and originally, the shading needed blended. Original artist was Sandstar12. I tried making this consistant with her other image, if not, politely inform me. 02:21, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. :) Blur the white flash right about the haunch on the ride side. 02:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Much appreciated :) 02:52, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty. There's shading on the white patch on the chest, blur that. 18:13, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:20, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches and define the earpink. Good job! 22:38, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think the changes just stopped showing. It's back to her old longhaired. 23:39, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'm seeing a cat with short hair. Blur the white on the haunch a tad, please. 02:36, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay good! 03:44, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is hard to see. Can you make it a bit bigger? 22:51, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

And maybe smudge the patches a little. 00:33, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights on the shoulder. 00:53, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:48, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tip of the earpink. 22:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:18, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you stretch the earpink towards the tip of the ear a bit? 22:20, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

But I just blurred it. Do you want it to go back to the previous one, then? 22:23, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

No, just make it a bit bigger, but keep it blurred like that. :D 22:30, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded alright 22:31, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours, just saying :) 22:31, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wing (KM) Tweaked/Redone
I was originally just going to tweak it, but, then I realized there was A.) almost no shading and B.) the mudstreaks looked drawn on and unnatural. Eh. I like the patches...but... I could do better. (Mud looks bad, I know. xD) 19:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks need to be bigger. They don't look drawn-on anymore, but she wouldn't be able to put such thin mudstreaks on herself. 21:00, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I was going by what was already on her kit mother image. I didn't like the way they came out anyways. I'll re-do them. 21:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Here's another mudstreak thing I tried. Ehh...this looks even worse, I think. Second one down on the file list. 22:01, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

That's actually very good! 22:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading. ;D 22:28, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

If I darken the shading too much, she'll look...odd. Anyways, re-uploaded. =P 23:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Make the Mudstreaks 2- 3 times bigger. and make less of them. <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 22:09, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 22:50, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Firecestar, which image are you seeing? If it's the one on the page, you're seeing the wrong one. =P 00:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 00:53, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Don't forget to add color the the nose. ;D I'm not completely sure I'm looking at the right one, but on the second image down, the nose isn't colored. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:08, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, you're not seeing things... I had a derp moment and forgot about the nose pink. >.> 03:48, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Re-uploaded. 03:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the brown on the paws. 22:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. See here for the most recent one. 18:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

The whole back leg shouldnt be brown. Add some fur. 18:53, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, that whole brown area is her paw. At least, that's how I see it. I thought it looked weird with it only going about half-way. But, whatever. I'll fix it, I guess. >.> 18:57, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lightningpelt (W) - Redone
Original artist was Hawkfire98. Redone as a longhair. I'm trying out Icy's tabby style and I quite like it. Comments? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:26, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the link to Icy's user page for you. xD Anyways, this looks...interesting. Leave it to Icy to come up with something like this. Could you blur the ear pink some? 04:28, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 18:58, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Wee ;D I love this, good job! But I think you should blur the white strike on the back. 19:06, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and redden the earpink. Great job! 22:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look kinda... odd to me, but that's just my opinion, do not be offended. Anyways, there's bits of waste around the charart, mostly around the tail and head. 23:27, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a tad bit green?... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:02, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail highlights. 00:52, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You know where to find the changes xP <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 01:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

You need to have a few more horizontal stripes on her tail. 14:47, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I love these stripes, Moonleaf. They look odd to you, but it's the artist's choice. Make her a lighter brown. 14:57, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. 22:16, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 01:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Center and blur the earpink and redden it. ;D 04:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 04:53, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Birchstar (L) - Redone
Redone as longhair, plus (no offence to the original artist) I thought I redo it completely because the stripes looked a little off. Plus, I tried forever to get that little pale spot on the foot to go away, it's always the same way with the leader blank :P Original artist was Spottedwing. 20:51, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is AMAZING! Maybe just darken the stripes ever so slightly and blur the sgading a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Add stripes to the head, smudge the earpink, and blur the tail sahding. 22:37, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

You should upload this to Birchstar (RC).leader.png, and there's a miscoloured toe on her hind leg. 23:25, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:50, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the shading on her belly darker, especially the fur that connects to her belly right beside her hind paw. 21:57, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 22:10, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 04:01, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Clawface (W) ~ Tweaked


Orginal artist was Snadstar12. Well, here he is....all I did was add some scars....I tred to make them match is rouge image. Idk if i did or not...but...comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:26, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Please fix the eye? 14:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar near the haunch looks too light at the bottom. 21:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

That is because i can't blur that part without blurring the lineart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just fix it afterwards or read a tutorial 22:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll move the scar over a bit...then I'll upload. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Moved the scar over, blurred the shading, and fixed the eye. What else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I've uploaded over to see if i could ger the changes to show. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (W)~ Redone
Needed to be long haired. Original artist was Sandstar12. Comments? 00:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! But redden the earpink. 00:35, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 18:32, September 3, 2011 (UTC)