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Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Dull and blur the highlights, please.-- 00:45, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:51, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing. 19:21, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

They're showing for me. I don't know what the problem is, if it's on your end or what... 17:27, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the light on <-- visible leg.

Re-uploaded 14:37, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded fixing shading 14:40, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Is it my screen, or is there a square on her chest? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

I'm trying to fix that. 15:46, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. gosh 15:53, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. WAAASTEEE also featherwhisker is a dood 15:56, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs? You're doing great! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:56, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i just want this to be approved tbh 16:20, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't worry you're getting there. Blur all the shading a bunch, and lighten it a shade or two on the right side > 20:10, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
omg don't kill me for ruining Sparrow's images please 18:30 Tue Dec 9

Thin out the pale chest and define the shadin. This looks nice! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest edges into the fur more. He looks amazing, you did a fine job, Amber! 00:42, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the ear pink more. You made him purrty :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:51, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

the pale part on his face should only go up to his nose. 04:29, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks everybody ^-^ 18:03 Wed Dec 10

Define shading. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is dark enough. In fact, I think it could be lightened up a tad. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:31, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

It needs to be defined, defining doesn't just mean darkening. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:33, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a bit? I can't see the pattern through the shading. Nice job Amber. ^^ 01:52, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Just saw that Fox said that already. ^^ 01:58, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

Oops, forgot to reup ^^ 12:55 Mon Dec 15

Thin out the pale chest, also lighten it up to match his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 14:00, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up his shading, I can't see his pattern through it at all.-- 00:35, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Also, he needs a collar since he was a kittypet back then. Am I right? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:20, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

You would be correct, Fox. ^^ If they were kittypets when they were kits, then they should get the kittypet collar unless otherwise stated.

Reupssssssssss 17:35 Fri Dec 19

Lighten the shading on the left side of his body. So cute :3 (I like the collar) 17:46, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the collar lineart on this -> side of the body? 18:35, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still workin'? 16:54, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah sorry I've been extremely sick so yep reups 10:05 Wed Dec 24

Mind defining the light on his tail? Looking good :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:25, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Burnt, honestly it's fine, it's probably just the dark base color. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:27, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, I think it could be defined. It almost looks black right now. 16:56, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki)~ For Approval
Woo~  First white cat (I really hope I did this right I don't wanna redo another charart :/) 11:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define ur light source. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:48, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up, too. It's making the white look pretty gray. 13:41, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

She's not supposed to be white. She should be a light color, hence why she looks off-white. The base from the kittypet is #E3E5E2. I'm also gonna rename this for you, since it should be File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png.

Should I change the pelt color then and reup? 11:17, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I suggest you to color pick off the apprentice image and just change the base color. The Fox Girl (talk) 13:18, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks hard edged, maybe blur it more? Then define it everywhere. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Meh that would put her back to where she is now. Just blur the edge of the shading dear, that should fix it up and save you a lot of stress. But define the depth just a tad, like darken it where the creases are and where there would be less light. You're doing wonderfully~ 02:33, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. The left paw and main body is telling me its coming from the <--- while the right paw and tail are telling me it's coming from --->. The head could use a little bit of shading, aswell. Perhaps just switch aroound the foreleg shading; or switch the tail or main body shading. 00:34, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Sorry I haven't been uploading recently. School, the upcoming holiday, bleh.. 14:09, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey, just as a head's up, don't align the images. It messes up the sections if too many are done at the same time. Define the light just a bit on <-- front leg.

Reups Gah sorry I must've not been paying attention 14:29, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Try adding some highlights or something- she's looking a bit on the grey side. This is very nice for a first white cat, though. ^^ 03:14 Fri Dec 19

Nevermind, I didn't see that she's supposed to be light-coloured, not white. Anyways, maybe define the shading just a little?

Reups Sorry about the confusion lol 14:42, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and chest shading a bit. ^^ 19:14, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, tbh. I can see them both clearly. Can you blur the shading a tad more, please?-- 06:11, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 13:55, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add more light to the tail? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:06, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Eh I think it looks fine. If she added more light, someone would tell her to define the shading on it again. 16:58, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Jessy (Ki) ~ For Approval
I really meant for this to be up earlier whoops 18:43, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Make the collar larger, as it'd be pretty big on a kit. This is pretty! 22:46, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

The size itself is fine. Given that there are some pretty thin collars out there, they'd still appear "normal" sized on a kit. It's clear that this collar is too big for Millie because of how it's positioned. If it were too small, then it would probably be moved. This is also the lineart from my version of Millie's kit, and I was told that the size itself was okay to use.

The collar is fine. Define the shading on the left foreleg, please. 00:31, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:56, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on her right side is a bit dark compared to her front legs' shading, maybe lighten it up a bit? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:19, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading over there is fine, but I think the shading on the front legs could be defined, as I can't see it too well. 14:38, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still workin', Shoon? 01:29, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yep. I defined the shading, but I won't define it anymore, because that'll make it look too dark. 01:50, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

The collar shading is contradicting the chosen lightsource. And after you flip it around define the collar shading. 20:08, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Dustpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
Ok, I don't know if chararts can be done in a day, but anyway, this is my first charart! I used PAINT.NET for this one. He's so cute! How can I improve? This is my first charart, so I may not be familiar with everything. BTW, how to make background color disapperar? I had trouble with that. Hope this helps! FireTail101 (talk) 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sign your posts with four tides plz. To remove the background, select the linear art, copy it, paste it onto ur base color layer, then use the magic wand tool and delete the background with control+x. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 23:58, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Plz match his other images by adding stripes as well. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups

The stripes are already there, just dark. U probably couldn't see them because of background. FireTail101 (talk) 00:13, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color and define the shading. Not bad for ur first charart! If You had seen my first charart, you'd laugh your head off. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:17, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Colour pick from one of the other Dustpelt images. Just be careful not to colour pick a shaded spot. Also with PAINT.NET, I leave the layers and save as a .pdn, then save again as a .png and that will make it one layer, making it easier to edit the waste. I leave the .pdn as multiple layers so I can edit it easier. This is great for first try! --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Stealthfire, I colourpicked each color from Dustpelt's apprentice image. FireTail101 (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I still think it's a bit dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

He's way to dark. He looks like a black cat on my screen, tbh. You can use  this to colorpick from; Because right now, he's so dark to the point i cant even see his stripes or lineart.

Use the medium brown on the bottom left as your base; while using the paler brown beside it for his pale parts. The pink is for his ears; and the orange/yellow in the middle is for his eyes. The darkest brown is for his stripes. Also, his nose needs to be black/dark brown to match his other images. 00:30, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups FireTail101 (talk) 02:08, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define/darken the stripes? I really can't see them. You're doing well! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Sure. FireTail101 (talk) 16:57, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base coat a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:23, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups - Darkened the stripes and lightened the base. Firetail 22:53, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Also, in terms of image approval, when do I become an apprentice? FireTail101 (talk) 01:27, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

When a senior warrior thinks you're ready, they will promote you. For now, thin out and add more stripes to match his other images. 06:16, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are a bit slanted compared to his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:05, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a bunch as its looking pretty neon. Try color picking from the starclanner. Also define the pale chest as its barely noticeable on this compared to his other images. You're doing a great job! 20:04, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

So fix the stripes, add more stripes, dim the earpink, and define the pale color. Ok, sure. Thanks for all the comments! FireTail101 (talk) 01:19, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? The image looks the same as before. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:04, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Bess (Ki) - CBA
hello naughty children it's darkness time. 03:17 Fri Dec 19

Brilliant! Define light on the tail? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but I couldn't do much without making the colour look funny. Also messed around with the white a tad because it was bugging me. 14:03 Fri Dec 19

Smudge the chest white a tad more. Hi Berry, welcome back! =) 14:31, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also adjusted the front paw shading a bit because it was bugging me. 14:27 Sat Dec 20

The shading is really dark on his right paw. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:21, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Shading darkness isn't required to match across the entire image. For all we know, that paw could be in some particularly dark part.

I think she's trying to say the shading is too dark on the white in that particular part. But I'm with you it could be a darker part it's hard to tell. 14:06, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Stormcloud (Ki) ~ For Approval
pls tell me I'm done with this set now 13:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading overall, then smooth it out. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 13:49, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think just smoothing it out would solve the problem. It doesn't distort the pattern in any way, shape, or form, and I can see it just fine.

I think it could be lightened just a shade over on the farthest side to our right ---> because I think it messes with the color a tad, and I can't really see the pattern through it. The rest is fine. I think this is the last one in the set Shinx lol 14:34, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

This computer makes shading appear so daaaarrrkk I'm glad my guess was almost ok 15:11, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Could u possibly smooth out the tail shading? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:22, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups It already was smooth, but ok 12:57, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading more on the legs? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:47, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

She smudges not blurs^^ and I think the shading in the ears could be lightened a shade.

reups 19:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Smoothen the shading on the back toward the chest. Kinda looks cut off, if you know what I mean.. (Was Stormcloud a Kittypet?)   18:58, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, he was. And if I do smooth it out, then I won't be able to see it, so may I please ask for a second opinion on this? It was also done exactly the same way as I did on the other kit images. I think it's just because of the stripes, to be honest. 20:05, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think it looks fine Shinx^^ 20:44, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
The kits taking over the world so here's a StarClanner :3 20:33, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

On the tail too. This is pretty! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups  Thanks:) 12:24, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the shading so it transitions more smoothly and blends better with the base. 20:00, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Rubblepaw 21:16, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Can I take over? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:59, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

You don't need to ask- you may take over if you don't have another project.

Re-uploaded I'll take over ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:56, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and lighten the shading on the tail. 10:10 Wed Dec 24

Re-ups There we go :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:23, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define your lightsource. The tail and back say > while the head and chest and legs say < 17:01, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

This image is cursed Could you lighten the shading a tad? It appears dark in some areas. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:09, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Shading on plain cats requires all your focus ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:38, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Ratscar (Ki) - For Approval
I do not remember uploading this at all yesterday, I was that tired. All colors are from the elder.

Could you smooth out the shading on the tail? Niiicceee :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:19, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the two front legs, just a bit not too much. This looks lovely =) 17:02, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Amberclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
First tabby! XD Also, I'm an apprentice and I have had three images approved, is there anything else I need to do to become a warrior? --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:45, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Nothing at all. Three images is three images, so that means you'll be promoted.

Thankyou! --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:59, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Would you mind defining the light on the tail? This is niiiccceee ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:46, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:00, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit more. Gorgeous =) 17:03, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:33, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Sunstar (W) ~ For Approval
I looovvvvvvvee Sunstar :p ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:12, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Hate to spoil it for you but the cite for a torn ear is very far into Bluestar's Prophecy, and he was only a warrior for a short amount of time at the start of the book, so can you remove the torn bit of the ear? --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:59, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, the cite is because he was addressed as a senior warrior. He was never once a warrior in Bluestar's Prophecy at all. I asked about the "senior warrior" cite counting for a warrior one, since the term 'warrior' was used, and that's why he gets it. Blur the tail shading.

Re-ups I was expecting that :| ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:19, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) ~ For Approval
Yeah... I don't know.

Could you define the ear pink on this ==> ear? Nice job :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:17, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, it's the shading over it which is making it darker than <-- ear. 10:08 Wed Dec 24

I have to agree with my sis, I can barely see it. Maybe lighten the shading up over there or add some light? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:29, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Clawface (Ki) ~ For Approval
Alright, not withdrawing this time. Comments? 23:19, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Beautiful work, Frosty! Define the Ear Pink in the left side of the ear and brighten the leaf part of the shoulder just a bit? <font face="Fantasy" color="black" size=0>19:03, December 24 2014

Thank you. But I personally think the shoulder is fine, since I shaded it on purpose to that darkness, as that is how this lightsource works. And I can see the earpink fine, and it's shaded that's why its a little harder to discern it than the other ear. But by all means if someone says otherwise I'll do so. 20:49, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading.

Re-uploaded. Also decided to erase some of the shading on the left ear, so you could see the earpink better. 23:26, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Bird That Rides the Wind (Ki) ~ For Approval
why was the shading such a pain to do 02:04, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Would you mind if you defined the shading? She looks nice ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:09, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reups thanks c: 16:12, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a tad more. This is beautiful, Sorrel c: 04:18, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Wind (Ki) ~ For Approval
Idk.-- 06:47, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too hard-edged. Perhaps smudge them? There's also a texture on the stripes for her other images- idk if you can tell or not.

Define the shading everywhere. damnit, I wanted this. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:07, December 25, 2014 (UTC)