Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Dapplenose (W) - Redone
Redone to match the Apprentice; Oa's were Scarlet and Darkhollows. Suggestions for improvement? 07:02 Wed May 8

It doesn't match the apprentice. The apprentice has no darker tail tip, smaller, lighter, less-defined dapples, and it doesn't have the tail undercoat thingy. 11:24, May 8, 2013 (UTC)

Actually the apprentice does have a darker tailtip, but I think it's smaller. And ya, lighten up the mottles a bunch. Looking good : D 00:33, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I got the file from Mounty. 21:22 Sat May 11

This also goes for the elder, the dapples are a bit lighter still. 03:04, May 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:28 Sun May 12

Try lightening the dapples just a biiit more. This is amazing. o.o Good job matching!

Re-uploaded. 06:13 Tue May 14

Dapplenose (E) - Redone
Same reasons as the Warrior. Oa's were Scarlet and Bramble. Suggestions for improvements? 22:00 Sat May 11

I see she has a pale chest and front paws, unlike the other chararts. Remove that, please? This is amazing. Bb un   legs  22:02, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

It's also on the warrior and the apprentice; but the shading makes it hard to see. 22:04 Sat May 11

Mmhm. I can see the pale feet on the apprentice. It's faint because of the shading, but it's there.

see warrior, also can you shrink the pale chest? It is smaller on the others. 03:06, May 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:28 Sun May 12

Same as warrior.

Re-uploaded. 06:14 Tue May 14

Littlecloud (MC) ~ Redone
OA is me. Redone for multiple reasons. sorry but something about this pattern is sorta funny

Maybe define the shading a tad? 00:57, May 14, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm, I'd rather not, but if someone else agrees, I'll gladly do it.

Thornclaw (Alt A) ~ Redone
Redone for odd stripes and colour and shading, OA was some user called Berryflower123 who couldn't art to save her life. Comments? c; 09:21 Mon May 13

Can you define the stripes? Right now it kinda just looks like texture. 11:51, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

In real life some ginger cats don't have overly defined stripes. I'll change it if someone else agrees however. 06:36 Tue May 14

No I agree they should be defined more. Plus, I'm not sure exactly how it works with things like this, but he is specifically a tabby in his main description. I can't remember if her was called a ginger tabby in any of the countless times he was mentioned as ginger though. Either way, they could use some defining.

Heatherstar (L) ~ Tweaked
OA be Mounty, tweaked to be paler. Comments? Bb un   legs  01:17, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

Tornclaw(Alt Ki) - Redone
OA is Rowan, redone for multiple issues. Comments? 01:32, May 15, 2013 (UTC)