Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define/darken the shading a little. -- 04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of like the stripes on the white, even if it isn't conventional. There's some blurred lineart on the ear. Define and brighten the earpink.  ❀ wild  heart ❀ 04:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Man HOW do you do that? awesome! But darken the shading. 04:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks :). Comments? Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  17:46, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wow this is awesome work I love it! Yes, I can't see ear pink, can you define it? Leaf-storm,17:49,September 25,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Thanks Leaf ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  18:07, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, I looked on the charart cearfully and I think there can be some more ear pink colour on the white tip of ear. Only a little. It's looking like she have ear only on orange part. Leaf-storm,17:31,September 26,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular too. 23:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 03:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah It's awesome (want help) Leaf-storm,14:18,October 1,2011 (UTC)

Yes, I can't figure out what you mean Leafstorm D:. Itt's just me and my stupidity acting up again xD Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  00:47, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink, make it brighter and more triangular. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * forget it* right? :-) Leaf-storm,9:10,October 2,2011 (UTC)

Elorisa, this hasn't been re-uploaded since the 25th of September. If you don't re-upload soon, I will be declining this. It's just taking up space. 17:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, sorry, I'll reupload it today. Personal life has been impeding, and that's a bit more important than charart. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:05, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload it? Too lazy to check the file page... Make the earpink bigger. 00:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think you may have blurred some lineart on the ear. And make the earpink more triangular. It's kind of smooshed against the lineart. Senbonzakura ''' Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:26, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Thornclaw (W) ~ Redone


Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?

Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now lighten it and add more shading all around. 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch -- 01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Sorry this took so long, I lost his shading layer, so i had to re-make his shading layer, and then, i rushed it, and got this....^^; Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and blur the highlights. 14:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Wow....that was fast ;D Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred more. 15:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-it has now been blurred to a max. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, it still needs to be blurred and blended a little more. 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried, had like 1% affect every here and there, but not much.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:26, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, I have some advice for you that helped me before I learned the other-worldly powers of the guassian blur tool. If you smudge the shading a lot with the second-to smallest or third-to smallest brush, then blur it on 100%, that actually helps to make the shading have a natural gradient. 00:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

.....What? I'm sorry, i'm diselxic..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 12:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

What don't you understand? You use layers, yes? 21:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

He still seems kind of shiny. Maybe dull the highlights a tad? Sky- Killer of Daleks and Cybermen 22:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy....I don't understand any of it, and No, i don't..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The shading. It needs to be blurred. 22:57, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

sighs* Alright, let me try to rephrase it (it's going to be more difficult since you don't have layers) The smudge tool (which is a hand with the pointer finger sticking out) is what you need. Use it like you would normally do to something to smear it, make it go back and forth. Then, take your blur tool. There should be a setting somewhere that has a bar and some numbers, it should say "Rate", slide it to the right until it says 100%. It should really help smooth your shading out a lot. This should be much more informative, yes? 03:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, i got it that time :) I'm sorry....I can understtand things that well, and then i get sonfuesed, and then i get mad, and then i kill a pillow.....DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hollowpaw (A) ~ Redone
Redone as longhair, and since it was decided to give him a pale underbelly rather then a white one. OA was Flamingomom3, I believe. Comments? 00:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the stripes and smudge the haunch stripes, and define the ear pink. Y U NO EMAL 2 TO ME??? >:| 00:23, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; it blends in with the pelt too much. Darken the shading, and blur and smudge the part where the pale chest meets the fur. 00:24, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you :3 Icestorm- I did email it to you ._. Changes are in the usual spot. 20:16, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, you didn't >:| Only until you saw the comment did you email it to me. x333 Blur the tail stripes. 20:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, I did. Lol. 20:49, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The eye seems to blend in with the pelt, but that could just be me. 21:18, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? The color or the eye itself? The eye color stands out fine to me. 00:11, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, it's not just you Ivy, I agree. I can barely see them through the pelt. Brighten them a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. 01:55, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes more, please. 01:58, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you lighten the belly a bit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:31, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Check the file history for changes. 01:59, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 23:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Now blur the shading. 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Chest shading needs to be blurred and lightened. 11:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

^ Looks like someone forgot to sign! 00:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:44, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; other than that, I think its awesome! =3 21:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC)~ Tweaked
The patches needed to be smudged more like the other images. I also made the ear pink bigger, and changed the nose back to black. 01:50, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Change the nose back to pink. It's part of her description. 01:57, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make her mottled, and define the stripes on her tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:01, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Did you re-do this... 21:42, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Why did you delete two of your own messages, Icestorm? 21:46 Mon Oct 3

Oops. x3 I said - darken the hue of the eye color and who was the OA? ;) 22:11, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Icey, we're not starting something else. Not here. Take it up with her elsewhere. Darken the shading a tad. 23:05, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- After Kitty's message everyone knows who the OA was. And no i didnt redo it. 22:50, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can I ask how you managed to make the pelt look like that if you didn't re-do it? I'm curious, because I like it. 22:51, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Colour pick and float (under select) then you can do whatever without messing up the lineart. I just smudged them. I used to do it with all my images, up until Echomist when i acctually started saveing layers. 22:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

It looks nothing like my image...:| Darken the shading. 23:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Dont you think if i redid it i would be claiming it as redone? 23:18, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh acctually nevermind. That was a redone version. Didnt do it on purpose. The right versions up now. 23:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

...but you did. Lighten the shading. 23:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-...I was ging to. But then in a show of good faith to the new rules, i just tweaked it. This is yours with my tweaking. 23:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ;D 23:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspelt (W) ~ Redone
Needed to be longhaired and to match her warrior/apprentice version. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire. Comments? 04:44, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

You'd never guess from the queen version, but there is supposed to be both orange and tan on it. Sorry. 04:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops, I'll work that in. Also, I have no idea why this is 16, when it published, it was 15. 05:03, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on the chest and tail bigger. Nice jobb! - 05:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I added in the tan and more reddish parts, taken from the queen image. I also made the white bigger. 14:16, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you smudge the patches more to match the other chararts? 23:11, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 23:27, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the white on the chest slightly? It makes it stick out and makes her look almost prickly, I'm going to make sure the other one isn't as smudged either. 00:51, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing yet. 03:24, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Now the changes are showing. 03:25, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Can you smudge the patch on the head more, though? Its hard to see. 22:04, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 00:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Tweaked
I got permission to re-do the stripes, so I don't want to hear any complaining. They didn't look tabby. OA is Elorisa. 20:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you forgot the earpink entirely, Cloudy xD There looks like there's waste by the tail and front paws. This is so nice! =) 20:30, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

I LOVE this!! Can you blur the edge of the stripes on the paws? 21:40, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I have the ear pink on an invisible layer. Whoops. Forgot to change it back. I'll fix it now. 22:40, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:50, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Could you lighten the eyes a bit, though? Also, there's a bit of waste right... err, below the bottom of the tail. xD 23:34, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nicely phrased. Re-uploaded. 23:38, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

The face shading is very dark, and the stripes are blotchy. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:03, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are supposed to be like that. I am not fixing them. The shading, however, I will. 20:05, October 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * /. Can you at least define the stripes on the midriff? They blend in with the shading. Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:07, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Elorisa, Iceheart herself told me I was allowed to re-do the stripes, so I would love it if you didn't complain. Re-uploaded. 20:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I wasn't complaining! Jeez! I was pointing out something constructive that just had to deal with the stripes fading into the midriff. Really, I wasn't going like omg change the stripes. :/. So whatever. It's not that important anyway. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:16, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I was talking about the blotchy stripe comment. I took the smudge tool to it, so that's why it looks like it does. I didn't see the other comment until now, actually. 20:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

So much tension lately! D: It'll be ok. On the very tip of his tail is some waste. 21:41, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mossfire (W) ~ Redone


OA was Hiddensun, and the patches needed to be redone, so it was listed on the redoing list. Comments? :3 23:16, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white. It looks pure white. This looks better then it did before. xD 23:51, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. =) Re-Uploaded. 23:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The darker brown on the tail needs like smudging or something. she's really pretty. :3 Sky- Killer of Daleks and Cybermen 00:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I just smudged them on my previous upload, but changes aren't showing. 00:22, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading more. Cute! 01:09, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot more and blur the patches. 11:55, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:29, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest. The patches are really messy...I suggest you smooth them out. 21:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The patches are supposed to be smudged that way...I like that style. We all have different artistic ideas, so I'm not going to change the patches, but I will blur the chest. 21:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

On the frong leg farthest away from us you've covered a bit of lineart with white. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded. 21:38, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MC) ~ Tweaked


Hah, she looks like she ran into a wall! Anyway, I just flattened her face and redid her scars to match the queen art, which Icestorm was going to do anyway. OA was Sandstar12, with major tweaks by Cloudskye and Icestorm123. Comments? 23:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

LOL (ahahahahaha I'm sorry but she does kind of look like she ran into a wall XD) Maybe try to make the snout a TEENSY bit longer...? I'm sorry... But I can't help it! She looks like she's a mouse or something ahahaha 00:12 Wed Oct 5

Wow. *dies from laughter* I'm sorry...but this is too funny! Yeah, Shelly, please extend it....just a little bit. 00:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

You could try making the face broader, as well, like a Persian's face. I know it might take a couple of times to get right, but I know you can do it. It might help to have a reference right there in front of you. 00:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps start the face going downwards a little bit farther off? The muzzle looks like it stops suddenly xD -- 00:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, I sat here with a pic of a Persian cat and tried to replicate the odd muzzle. It'll be easier with the Warrior art, when the herbs are out of the way. 03:48, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the herbs a more natural colour, they look too neon, and it bugs me. >.< 17:19, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made the herbs look more natural. I don't care if some users think the yellow means the herb is shriveled, it suits her and some plants are just naturally yellow. 22:22, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestar (L) ~ Tweaked
He needed his shading and highlights blurred, and the original artist was Lonewolf97. Comments? 00:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Can you lighten the front leg closest to us a bit? 00:23, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

There appears to be some waste by his haunch furthest from us. 00:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the earpink with the shading? Its too dark and looks like it is a different color than the other ear. 00:50, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

sweet! Thin out the chin shading - 01:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

There still may be some waiste around the charart (if I'm looking at the correct version. I can never tell if there's waiste in the image history.) 01:22, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rainy, I love this! I really see nothing wrong with this. What program do you use? 11:57, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (R) - Redone
Redone to match deputy charart. I would've had to redo it no matter what. OA was Silversong. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Scarlet, why is the file name Honeylead.rogue.png? 01:46, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Spelling error... I renamed it and re-uploaded over old file. Now I just gotta remember how to delete pictures again.... - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:48, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Edit, then use the Delete tag. =) Lighten the shading a bit. 01:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:59, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. Nice. ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (W) - Redone
I redid the stripes, but kept the pattern the same. It wasn't clear as to why the stripes needed to be change, but here's what I got. Comments? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white and brown meet, and darken the shading. 21:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. And dull it a little bit. Nice job. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better. Make the ear pink smaller, please. 21:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W) - Redone
Redid to match leader image, impossible to work with the old image. I like the lineart. Don't ask me to make the ear pink smaller of lighten the shading, because I like it that way. 21:56, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

See? Didn't I just say that everyone has different artistic ideas? xD Looks wonderful! Can you darken the tail shading, though? If you want, also add a stripe to the top of his head, because most tabbies have those. 21:59, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Done. I darkened the tail shading and added half a M to his head because it's not full view, so if you were looking at Crookedstar's leader image at this view, his M would be half. x333 And yeah, you did. Thanks x3 22:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail(E) - Redone
Fail image iz fail. I redid it to match the others, OA=seniór Sparrowsong - 21:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

beautiful my love. xDD Darken the shading a lot. 21:59, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Damn Icey. I was going to say that. This is wonderful, and the only issue I have with it is the shading. 22:00, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. 3 edit conflicts. Looks great! Can you define the earpink, and add stripes to the tail? Its supposed to be a pale ginger tail, so it should have stripes. 22:01, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's pinkish-orange, and the others don't have tail stripes. 22:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. xD 22:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ohohoh, now this is startin' to be not such a fail! B) - 22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

No its not; just erase the waste. 22:07, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Dear. Waste, my love. Make the ear pink redder. 22:07, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded again grooaaan, Im stupid, forgot about the waste DX And I got the earpink from the other images. - 22:09, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh no. XDDD Can you blur it some more? 22:26, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 22:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the tail shading any more? 22:53, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (D) Re-done
OA is Mousetalon, needed to be long haired. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink. Looks good. 22:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, and redden the earpink. xD 22:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the shading thicker. I advise you to make the haunch shading darker than the rest. 22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I knew the shading was too light...oh well. Re-uploaded. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:20, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, redder, and blur it. 22:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The evil ear pink strikes again. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Its better now. Blur the edges of the earpink. 22:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)