Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 30

Graystripe - Silver Nomination
I'm surprised he's not already gold. :) I don't own many of the books so I may need help with the improvements.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:13, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

For such a major character, he has awfully short history for several sections, particularly some of the original series ones. Those definitely need fleshing out and he could probably use a general look over if someone has time. insane brick'd 21:29, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'd do it myself, but I don't have any of the books. If anyone would like to do it, that would be great. I mean, come on, it's Graystripe! :)-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:39, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I've been editing Graystripe for a few days, he could need some extension in the OS, but I don't know if I should do it. Sky wish16  Nannerpus, the banana peel 00:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

If you have the books, you're more than welcome too as I don't own those books.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 01:14, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wait. Do we need a citation for Tigerstar mentoring him? Quailflight 09:34, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah we should. It should be in Into the Wild.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 10:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Not just Into the Wild, but a page source, too. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:42, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Does anyone have the page? It's after Lionheart dies.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 12:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I have Into the Wild, but I can't find it. Quailflight 19:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I read Into the Wild, starting after Lionheart died all the way to the end. There's acually nothing that says Tigerclaw mentored Graypaw. There was one point when Graypaw when to a training session with Tigerclaw and Ravenpaw, but there was never an official ceremony or anything after that Night  Fall 04:42, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I was reading Fire and Ice and Bluestar said when Graystripe and Fireheart got apprentices, she told Fireheart to pass down all he learned from Tigerclaw and Lionheart. Maybe we could get a citation for that? Quailflight 14:37, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

You mean Graystripe? If so, that would work.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:51, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

No, it was Fireheart. Bluestar mentioned only Lionheart to Graystripe. But I think it would be relevant enough for Graystripe. Quailflight 19:54, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well, wasn't Graypaw's training almost complete when Lionheart died. I'll be able to check on Tuesday, since I'll be getting the Original Series then.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 15:48, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. I'm in Chapter 17 in ItW all the cats are sitting vigil for Lionheart and it says nothing about Tigerclaw taking over Graypaw's training. What do you think? Should we keep Tigerstar on or not?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:38, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

As for fleshing out the OS section, I've added more to his Rising Storm section. He's only seen at the end, but he's mentioned alot by Fireheart and Bluestar.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:06, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Battles of the Clans is missing. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 10:40, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I haven't finished BotC yet so could someone give me a hand please?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 14:24, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone still working on this article? insane brick'd 12:56, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I am. I just finished his BotC section. How is he now?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 17:12, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Is he ready for silver? Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   19:38, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think his OS sections could be more detailed considering he's such a major character, right now they're fairly general. insane brick'd 17:53, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Would someone be willing to fix him up? I'm going on vacation so I won't be able to work on him. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   11:03, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to expand some of his book sections. ♥Ice shine★  17:21, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

You did a good job, too, Iceshine! I think that he's ready for silver, myself, although the sections that should be checked most carefully are his Original Series sections. He's not such a major character anymore, but he definitely was way earlier. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you guys, so much, for fixing him up when I couldn't. I'm leaving on vacation for a week tomorrow. I won't be able to fix him up. If anyone would like to fix him up while I'm gone, I'll be really thankful. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   13:59, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Scratch that. I'm working on him myself. Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   22:25, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Archived due to age - feel free to renominate when he's ready. insane brick'd 21:25, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf - Silver Nomination
She looks ready. → •Maple  fern•  ←  21:13, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf's history could be expanded quite a bit, especially in The Sight. I don't think she's quite ready.

 E c h o  star   13:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone working on this? insane brick'd 12:56, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I can start expanding that. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:57, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded The Sight as much as I could. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:20, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

She looks pretty good now, though her Dark River and Outcast sections could stand to be a tad bit longer... insane brick'd 18:05, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I expanded her Dark River section, but I'm afraid I might have expanded it too much :/ Night  Fall 21:29, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded her Outcast section. Now she looks ready. Echo star  Getting a tan 18:13, July 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * There are some issues with consistency I noticed in the Outcast section - it says something about Berrynose and Birchfall being caught hunting in SC territory, but later calls Berrynose by his apprentice name. These appearances need checking to make sure they are actually correct. There are also issues with tenses and links throughout the article which I will try to find time to address later if nobody else does beforehand. -- Sandy star 12:30, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to clean up her Outcast section, but it didn't really go that well... Tawny SMEASH 17:03, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Archived due to age - feel free to renominate when she is ready. insane brick'd 21:25, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Rippletail- Silver Nomination
With some minor adjustments, Rippletail's article could be silver.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  23:06, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The Fourth Apprentice section could be expanded. There might be a few more mentions of him in Fading Echoes--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:15, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

The history could be expanded. ♥Ice shine★  17:01, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'll look into Fading Echoes. My copy of The Fourth Apprentice is being borrowed at the moment, so could someone else look into that?  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  12:54, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Since it is his only major appearance, his TFA section should be more detailed. Right now it's general; it only talks about right as the journeying cats get together and then when they fight the beavers. More detail about the journey itself could be added, I'm sure he didn't vanish just for that part :P insane  brick'd 18:21, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Archived due to lack of work. insane brick'd 21:25, July 20, 2010 (UTC)