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Piketooth(W) - Declined
Yay, my first charart. Comments/crits? Also, I realize that it's a GIF and not named Piketooth.w, could someone please help? I don't know how to fix it. 18:16, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is over 35 images. This will be declined. Sorry. 18:18, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? I know, I fail, but what's that mean? orz 18:22, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

And also a question, what's up with my signature? :o 18:24, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

There is a limit on how many images can be up for approval, and that limit is 35. Also, Maplepool already reserved Piketooth on the 2nd of September. Sorry 18:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (KP)-Declined
I realise his collor isn't filled in about as soon as I uploaded it. I did fix it, but the changes aren't showing up again xD. So... he was fun to do. I love torties, and Sol is one of my favorite characters. Ahah, I had forgotten how fun doing charart was. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 11:21, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The white tail tip is too dark, it looks like it's gray... şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  13:13, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

NICE! define the shading a bit -- 16:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on his belly fill the area you have indicated, right now it's a white dot and he has a black belly. Define the shading on the face, and define the depth in his eyes please. 17:21, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, his back foot farthest from us is a tad bit dark, it looks silver instead of shaded 18:31, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

His ginger patches should be lightened to match his loner image. Otherwise, great job. 22:27, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Ginger, it needs ginger patches. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:26, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, they were ginger, but the shading was really dark. In any case, '''reuploaded. '''I think I took care of everything, even if it's not showing. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 23:28, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the smudging a bit? Fear the pink mist! 05:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Personally I think bluring it would ruin the effect and it wouldn't match the other images. If you guys really want me to I could, but I'd rather not. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 07:30, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darkhallows, don't blur. It looks good the way it is. =) 07:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 20:27, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I took the color from his other images. Again, if you want me to change it, I will. I just want consistantsy xD. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 00:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It needs some dark brown and tan, so the colours match the other images. And the ear pink doesnt match the other images. 19:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks brown, lighten it a bit. 17:30, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

His right hindleg seems to have a yellow smudge on it. 22:33, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

THe tailtip has a birghter ginger smudge on it. :o Ginger  Heat wave  + Power outage  = Unhappy Ginger  19:05, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Darkhallows? Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 21:13, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

If shes not i so shawty taking over, Ill withdraw my Echomist image. I just cant stand it. And i love sols art. 21:18, August 26, 2011 (UTC)


 * I think I'll give her til Sunday to upload it. Sound fair? Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 21:22, August 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * I am still working on it. Um, can anyone tell I procrastinate? A lot? In any case I'll do this in a few hours, I can't at the moment. However, after that I might not be on for a few days. Hurricane Irene is expected to knock the power out here, so I won't have internet accsess. Darkhallows   Enter the cave? 08:43, August 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * REuploaded. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 14:21, August 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * Are the ear and nose colors supposed to be corresponding? Smudge the black on the face a bit more so it looks like the markings on the back. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:08, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Blur the earpink more, and add highlights to the tail/shading. 21:57, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lighter broen more sandy. 22:48, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! There is a random white spot under his front leg, is it supposed to be there? Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 12:39, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the black patches; they kinda disappear with the brown. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Darkhallows? 04:57, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and make it bigger. Moonstorm88 10:09, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Its been over a week. I'm going to take over. 00:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But im going to start new. Declined due to lack of work. 00:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sandypaw(A)~Declined
Ok, here's Sandypaw, I did reserve him. And it is not over the limit because Cloud's elder was withdrawn and Piper's loner is in CBA. I'm really proud of this one. AND I know it says Sandypaw has an unknown gender BUT in The Rescue (which I own) he is depicted with no eyelashes meaning he is male because all of the females have eyelashes. I rest my case ;D Light to the night sing the song of life 16:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

What color are the eyes? Also smudge the brown more. It looks good though ;) <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 16:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good but it's over limit, I think it will be declined. I'm sorry but it's really good work. Leaf-storm,16:13, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Green, his eyes are a dark green. Did you read what I wrote? Cloud was withdrawn and Piper and Blackclaw is in cba which means they'll be approved ana Cloud needs to be taken off anyway. So this isn't over the limit, *sigh*, anyway REUPLOADEDLight to the night sing the song of life 16:22, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes there are CBAs but they're not approved yet, understand? This means this is still over limit. Leaf-storm,17:00, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But Cloud needs archived which means I'm 35.Moony the Magic Cupcake 17:06, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But you still aren't allowed to post it until it gets archived. The rules need to be followed. If a lead sees this, it will be declined, and you will have to re-post it after Cloud is archived. 18:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Arg, alright :\ 18:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is declined. One, because it's over the page limit and two, we don't know Sandypaw's gender. 20:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud (E) - Declined
This is Cloud with star in belly from the tribe of rushing water. Its not my greatest charat ever but its not terrible.

Acornfur 19:53, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

-takes giant breath- -- 20:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) de-thumbed it :P
 * 2) save it as a png not a jpg x)
 * 3) This is over the limit, so it'll be declined 8(

Back up. Darken the shading a lot more. Is there a light source? 00:31, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

NOW it's not over the limit!! XP Now, add shading and like I said before, sace it as a png this time -- 00:33, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any shading or highlights? If not, please add some. If there is, define them. :p 14:08, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think you have to redo it because it's all pixelated. That happened to Rainflower too D: 16:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think it has a white background. Erase it; add shading, and blur the earpink and add shading to the eyes. 23:08, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

something tells me this dude's never gonna respond Nah, your gonna havta redo this~save it as a png this time, THEN do all the stuff above^ -- 01:55, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Since it looks like you're having trouble with your charart, might I help you? I can effectively discuss how to improve this picture if we talk via our talkpages so it doesn't clutter the page. Since I'm a Warrior of the project, it would be selfish of me not to :) 13:18, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 17:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for 5 days, so...2 more days, and it will be declined due to lack of work. ` 23:53, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

This isnt deleted yet... But I`ll make some comments anyway.It would: Need to have a lighter shade of pale gray, needs shading and highlights, Its 'Cloud with Storm in Belly' and I dont really see the ey-white in her eye. Just saying, though its gonna be deleted. 00:55, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

It won't be deleted, per say. Just declined due to lack of work. Also, highlights are optional. So, I think it's been over two days. I do believe this is now considered declined... 02:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Unless someone wants to take over xP -- 02:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

If Fleck gets approved soon, I'd be happy to take this over. 03:17, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy if Fleck was CCBAed id say you could but for for now anyone can take it. 03:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can I archive this then? It's just taking up space. 20:22, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of activity. 21:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lark That Sings at Dawn (Ki) ~ Declined
My first charart. Tell me how i did! Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 22:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed it(Your welcome XD) make the stripes thinner, and blurr the leg shading -- 22:14, September 6, 2011 (UTC) This is declined. Moonleaf already has this image reserved. Please check the table before posting an image. 22:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also, we don't know if she's getting a kit image or not. 22:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail(E) ~ Declined
Ok here's Fallowtail's elder image. If there's any reason I shouldn't put this up I'll gladly take it down and wait. But according to me this is the 35th image. 23:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This will be declined. This is the 36th image on the page. You can put it back up once there is less then 35 images on the page. 23:18, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay i'll wait till tomorrow :) 23:20, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing (WC) -Declined


It had to be redone....so i did it....Mapleflower 19:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Your not even a WARRIOR, let alone a PCA member, this will be declined. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to reasons above. 20:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail(E) ~ Declined
Here he is 00:13, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the tail highlight, and fix the earpink so it isnt touching the lineart, then blur it. 00:14, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

This has exceeded the page limit, therefore, I am declining it. Please make sure there are less then 35 images on the page before you set it for approval. 00:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I did but i didint see larks. :(

Sorry. There's no exceptions. It shouldn't be much longer before you can re-add it. These things happen. 00:19, September 8, 2011 (UTC)