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Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes and make the ear-pink a bit redder 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The furry effect needs to be smudged an blurred, and perhaps lightened. It looks like tabby stripes on the brown. 06:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't smudge it, because it's smudged to the limit; but it has been blurred. The earpink will remain untouched, since it's from the warrior. 16:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brown's too dark and the furry texture still looks like stripes. 00:30, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Which brown? The main one, or the texture brown? 18:17, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

I believe she is talking about the main brown. 00:29, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

I got the main brown from the image, but I'll fix the fur texture in a little while. 19:10, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:19, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

The brown in general looks much too dark. It looks near black. Lighten it. 01:13, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture a little bit more, and erase some so that more of the base white is visiable~ 01:58, 30, 06, 2012

Perhaps remove a little bit of it, like stated above, but make it more transparent as well to give the shaded look. 17:25, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:18, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase some of the texture on parts that are highlighted more. Like, erase it a lot, so that only a little is showing. It will add a lot more depth and shading. Breeze whisker  17:42, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Hollowflight (A) - Redone
His pale belly went too far into his stomach, he was too dark, and his stripes were too oversmudged. And oh my god I failed on this one. Especially the smudging...Comments? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! :3 Just smudge the pale belly a bit to look like the other image. ^^ 02:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

His pale belly isn't smudged in his warrior...at least, not as far as I can tell. 02:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yes it is. Please smudge it. 06:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

And can you make the unshaded brown a tad lighter? (I think that's the word I'm after) Skt Spoilers... 10:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Skt, the "unshaded" brown's color code was taken from the warrior image. But if others agree, I'll lighten it. 18:00, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but I agree. Either that or thin out the shading a bit and add/brighten the highlights. 05:25, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to have to re-do this because I got my computer back and my file isn't on this....and the computer I was doing Hollowpaw on is broken. So this is going to be redone later. 17:15, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Redone. 22:59, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

forgot the white pixels in the eyes? XD 23:40, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: ...I'm an epic fail. 23:43, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are a bit too smudged, can you fix that? 20:18, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Re-did the stripes. 02:58, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the warrior more, probably by making them thinner and adding a few small stripes? 05:09, 29, 06, 2012

Re-Uploaded: I swear this is the last time I'm going to be working with these kind of stripes... 11:47, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps define some shading on the stomach and <-- side of the head? It looks fantastic, Icy. 17:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I actually re-did the shading with my new method...o3o And than you Splashy <3 00:51, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

The markings on his face don't really match the warrior. 14:55, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the bellyfur a little more cream, I know it has more shading than the warrior but it still doesn't quite match. 21:03, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

The belly fur is the same color as the warrior. 21:08, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: But, I presumed you were asking me to remove shading from the belly so it became lighter, and that's what I did. I also added a couple stripes to the face. 21:12, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E) - Tweaked
Tweaked color to be more brown. I think this is too dark though. OA was Paleh (I think) Comments? e.e 08:05, 25, 06, 2012

I dunno about the darkness, but make the skin less fluro. Skt Spoilers... 12:42, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I so failed on that. -has no brain- xDDD 10:01, 26, 06, 2012

Can you make the patches a little less neon? 15:38, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  09:32, 27, 06, 2012

Can you fix the ear pink? It seems...out of place...or something like that. Just shrink it a bit, maybe?

Reuploaded -  06:40, 28, 06, 2012

Could you blur the earpink a little? 20:10, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also make it a little less saturated? It seems...neon.

Reuploaded -  Earpinks... eh >.> 05:28, 29, 06, 2012

Blur the bottom and the corners of the ear-pink a bit more 03:49, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I just blurred the whole earpink since it was irking me... -prays no more comments on ears- 07:38, 30, 06, 2012

Oakheart (Alt.Kit) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to match alt deputy. Not sure about changes. 17:58, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? Unless it already matches the deputy. 17:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:32, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

I tried a new method of shading. ...and it hates me... Re-Ups^ 23:25, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda dull/ashy against a brown cat. Thicken it a bit and darken it on the tail. Bright/define the ear-pink just a touch. 01:24, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ 22:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around the paws. 00:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/round the shading under the chin and on --> side 03:49, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink match the alt deputy. (Although I don't think it really matters... e.e) 05:11, 01, 07, 2012

Re-Ups^ @DJ, I don't think it matters because the alt. warrior and alt. deputy don't match each other. 17:23, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. 17:25, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Breeze whisker  17:40, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just made her a bit darker to match her other images. 02:20, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading, if possible?

Reuploaded  02:32, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad, and make the shading less brown tinted and more of a grayish color for consistancy. :3 09:22, 26, 06, 2012

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing, I believe. ^^  15:53, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the belly highlight, and the haunch one too? 17:49, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also blur the ear pink a tiny bit? 15:43, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the belly and haunch highlight and the earpink. 20:55, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the brown a bit more... of a greenish tint? owo To match. 05:33, 29, 06, 2012

Define the shading on the belly a tad? Skt Omnia vincit amor  13:24, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading on the white areas 03:48, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined/Darkened the shading on the belly and the white areas. I only added a bit of a greenish tint, since if I did it took much it would look too weird. >.<  18:27, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Ki) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading. Changes might not be showing, and I personally believe it could be blended a bit more. x3 OA was Sunleap. Comments? 06:54, 28, 06, 2012

I believe someone forgot to add it when they put this on the tweaks needing to be done list, but this also needed to be darkened to match her other images. also, dull the highlights. 11:21, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Yeah I'm not very fond of this image. :P <span style="">06:05, 29, 06, 2012

Can you make the earpink less red and more pink? 00:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I took the color off the warrior image now. <span style="">03:01, 30, 06, 2012

Blur the shading some more some more, or lighten it. Breeze whisker  17:39, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. W) ~ Redone
I'm sorry, but there was no way I could keep this a tweak. I never had original layers for this one, since it was my first approved charart from scratch, I had to re-do the coloring, the fur length, and, frankly, that horrid shading. x.x OA was me, as my mini-rant states. XD 00:43, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

I just realized I made the shading wayy too dark. I'll fix that in the next upload. 00:44, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the shading a bit? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 00:47, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit. 00:52, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a touch more and thicken it. And redden the ear-pink a touch more. 03:45, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for shading issues...OA was Leafy. Comments? 06:07, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 13:08, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define the facial shading and the tail shading. 19:12, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Man, I fail at rogues xD 10:26, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (KP) - Tweaked
What's this? A tweak I haven't failed epicly at? It can't be! But it is. Anyways, this is Sol and all I did was add mottles, but I don't think the changes are showing. The OA was Iceheart Darkhallows, I think. Comments? 11:56, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the orange less.. eye-burn-y? 21:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

How? 00:19, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

I believe Loonie means to make the orangle less saturated and reddish. ouo <span style="">03:34, 30, 06, 2012

Rosepetal (W) - Tweaked
She needed to be brought back to the color she was before to match her other images, and actually be dark cream. I need to fix some shading, I know. I'll do that in the next upload. Breeze whisker  21:26, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, define it, and make it more triangular. 22:16, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe tinge the shading browner/redder. She looks kinda ashy/gray. 00:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. (Yes, the highlights are tinted green.) Breeze  whisker  00:56, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the base just a tad? It doesn't quite match the other two images.

Make the earpink more triangular and a tad smaller. 01:03, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/redden the ear-pink 03:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's all I'm going to do with the earpink. Breeze whisker  17:37, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and perhaps make it thinner around the back area. 21:01, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Needed ragged fur (Changes may not be showing yet) Ohgawd I killed it Comments? 01:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. -- 16:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the ragged-ness? O_o Maybe make it match her queen? 16:22, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, wouldn't her fur be a bit more ragged as both a loner and rogue, probably from the fighting, and all of that?

True, but I think it could be toned down just a tad. XD <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 20:18, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 <span style="">04:47, 01, 07, 2012

Blur the tail shading. Nice job, Stoner. 21:00, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes. OA was this awesome person. Comments? 09:02 Sat Jun 30

Dark (TB) ~ Redone
My first charart is redone~ 8D Back into doing chararts now, wee. I think I made him too dark (and not because his name is Dark, Loonie D:<), but I'll just wait for some input. Comments or concerns anyone? owo 20:58, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mud o3o 21:01, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the base pelt color a tad so the shading stands out. 21:24, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Great job, Splashy. Lighten the ear-pink and add more mud streaks. 20:58, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Ok, before anyone says anything, the original shading on Cinderpelt's first kit made the new shading really hard to blur, so I just redid it all together. Recent OA was Iceheart. 15:09, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry...but It was nominated for a tweak, the vote passed, and so it should be a tweak.... *shrug* 17:40, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I got permission from a SW before I redid it (Trolleh.) But if it needs to be tweaked, then I'll simply tweak it. 18:34, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, if you had permission, I guess. 18:33, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken, thicken, and blur the shading. Blur the ear-pink. Excellent job, though. 20:56, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Purdy (KP) ~ Tweaked
Just switched the cut ears so that the images would match. 19:49, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Kinkfur (W) - Tweaked
Stripes looked kinda triangly to me and I just had to make another charart with Willow's pattern. OA was me. Comments? 20:58, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I know this isn't your problem, and refuse if you want, but can you thicken the fluffy lineart? And define the shading. 21:04, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds (SC) - Tweaked
OA was Flamingmom. Just slapped another layer of shading on. 20:58, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the haunch and shoulder. 21:03, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the bent paw. 21:04, July 1, 2012 (UTC)