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Pipsqueak (GC) - For Approval
Pipsqueak the pirate. ouo

I think the shading is leaking on the <--- forearm where the white meets the black belly fluff? I love this pattern! 19:38, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I got it?

Maybe define the shading on the tail a bit more. Did you get the pipsqueak the pirate from mop? Lol. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:11, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You mean MLP? Dang right I did. Pipsqueak is one of my favorite side characters, so when I saw they used the name in Warriors, I couldn't resist seeing if I could get his image.

Define the face shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:50, December 6, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Dotty (GC) ~ For Approval
I'm not sure if the larger ginger patches would need stripes. 16:56, 11/30/2017

Re-uploaded. Changed the pattern. 17:47, 11/30/2017

In regards to your question: we used to say that adding stripes to ginger-and-white patched cats (people being picky+art style changes haven't shown this recently) was a choice, depending on patch size and all of that nonsense. I'd say we'll still abide by that. Plus, you can only add so many stripes on an image.

Ah thank you! Okay. I just wasn't so sure it'd be allowed or not. I did a google search for ginger and white cats, and most had tabby stripes on the ginger. So I just added it. 18:25, 11/30/2017

Well, just because google says something, doesn't mean we abide by it. While stripes are mandatory on solid ginger cats, when they have something else, it's a bit different. It's the same as a tortie that has ginger; stripes are not mandatory on torties who have specified ginger parts as well. It's an optional thing as far as I'm aware.

Maybe add some shading by --> side of the muzzle and add some shading to the start of the tail(by the legs)? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 05:27, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Wait, are there stripes on this at all? Because the dots aren't stripes... we've redone images for having those dots on images before. If your patches were a lot smaller, then you could get away with it, but these are really big patches and do need the stripes.

Those are stripes. It's just a style I do. If it's too confusing I'll change it. And Cosmo, what do you mean? There is shading at the start of the tail. 08:19, 12/05/2017

How exactly are those stripes? I don't get it. You'll have to change it, I think.

I can kind of see how they are stripes because of the arrangement of the dots, but they can easily be mistaken as dots. I'd say change it. 20:13, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the right (our right) outer ear a bit, it's too dark for me to make out the fur color. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:52, December 6, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the wait. I couldn't decide on a pattern, and I still am not sure if this looks good. I just went ahead and re-did everything. 16:08, 12/06/2017

smooth out the shading on that whole area to the --> of the --> front leg if that makes any sense at all

define/add some light to -> ear or deifine/add shading to <- ear

Re-uploaded. I don't think adding shading to earpink is a requirement. 06:21, 12/07/2017

Nope, that it is not. It's just a personal preference that people seem to like to do.

Dovewing (GC) - For Approval
while doing the shading i realized halfway through i was using the wrong brush sorry if it looks weird lmao. also, don't these need to be added to the shading tutorial thing?

will reups for green eyes in a min pls don't comment on that

reups

Smooth out the shading a bit more 00:27, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups just took the blur tool over the entire thing. rip

There's a speck of waste outside --> haunch. 01:05, 12/01/2017

Try defining the eye depth and/or expanding the pupil--that may help with the eyes.

reups the pupil is supposed to be small. if someone else agrees, i'll widen them a bit, but slit eyes are my favorite :^(

Perhaps desaturate the shading just a tad. And I will be adding these once I get the pen for my tablet. 01:48 Fri Dec 1

Could you define the eye depth again? --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:50, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups okay I KNOW I'm really annoying for this... but can I get a second opinion for the eye depth? honestly I can see it just fine and I think it's really clear as a transition from light to dark. it is my image so I'm probably just biased lmao

I think the eye depth's fine imo. Anyways, I don't think the smoky parts have texture on the other images? I'm probably wrong though. Could you define the ear pink as well? 01:56, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Eye depth is fine.

reups the choice of ear pink color was not a good one for this pelt color

I actually think the eye depth could be defined a bit, and might the transition to lighter/darker colors in the eyes be softened a bit? It seems a little too abrupt and sharp, and could probably be blurred or smudged or something.

seems to be a little shading leaking from the foreleg closest to us (near the top of it) and the base of the tail. 19:29, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups I have not once blurred or smudged my eyes, but ok. (i'm sorry if i'm salty it's been quite a day. merry christmas)

Can you define the shading in both ears? 00:33, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

I put the ear pink over the shading because it was really hard to see. I'm like 86% sure I can do that?? idk if I can't I'll go ahead and put it back

Whoops. Sorry about that - didn't mean to make it difficult. I'm just having a hard time seeing it that's all. 00:45, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Shading ear pink isn't even a requirement of the project. It's a personal preference. Danny, the ear pink is difficult to see if you place it under the shading, so I think in this case, we'll let it as-is, no?

sounds good to me 👌

Okay sorry about this but can you smooth out the shading on the legs just a little bit? Then I'll CBA this.

reups i really need that wacom drawing tablet thing for christmas so i can have GOOD art. yall aren't even gonna be ready for the glow up.

Maybe expand the tail shading a wee bit? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 05:26, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

reups my art program keeps shutting down unannounced so i have no idea what color the shading is supposed to be to work with the layer settings. end result: the tail shading is a different color than the rest of the shading but it's fine

Fierce (GC) ~ For Approval
Easy-to-match pattern? Never heard of it. Also I apologize for the gross shading here, will fix it later.

She doesn't look like a tortoiseshell. She looks more like a brown cat with orange flecks. Also, it didn't say Fierce was missing a leg, only that one was shorter. 00:30, 12/02/2017

I think if you add some black in there, it should be ok. also if you just make the paw lineart more visible on the shorter leg, that should solve the problem. ^^ 01:04, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Between the start of the tail and then under her missing foreleg, connect the hind leg to make it appear and not have the tail be directly next to it without showing the hind leg where it sits. (If this doesn't make sense I can do a redline) <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:07, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Yeah, Cosmo can you give me a redline?

Could you add another toe to the shorter foreleg? On the normal blank that leg has four toes, not three. 16:44, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Maybe define the shading a little bit? 22:50, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shorter leg's paw should droop a little more, since it's just hanging there

re-up May fix that paw later.

there's a pixel of tail lineart leaking onto the altered leg, plus can u thicken the altered lineart like just a tiny bit? i love this

Sorry for the late comment, but like I redlined where what I said earlier. https://ibb.co/cwpkzb <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 05:23, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define shading on the tail? --ErmineGlow (talk) 22:16, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up This what you meant Cosmo? (also thanks Danny ^^)

Kind of, but the one you did is going through the tail, lol. I tried redlining it better. https://ibb.co/b62ecw <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:02, December 7, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Better?

Tigerstar (AVoS) (GC) ~ For Approval
Let me know if I did anything wrong! First image; stripes are not my forte ;n; But overall, I think I did pretty good. Thoughts? SpookiEevee (talk) 03:56, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

This is really pretty! Good job on your first image! Define and smooth out the shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:59, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Really nice! Define the ear pink in the <- ear? 16:26, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, could you define the ear pink in general? I can't see it at all. Also, can you define the leg shading? Although if the shading comment is already covered under what Cosmo said, I apologize.


 * Adding onto mine and Jayie's comment, expand the shading everywhere and define it on the paws and tail a bit more and the muzzle area too.  <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 05:24, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Has it been over 24 hours or is the limit more? If not, may I take over if it gets declined? Sorry if I'm rushing ^^; <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 16:12, December 8, 2017 (UTC)

Marigold (GC) ~ For Approval
it's been forever. i might've named this wrong idk 04:40, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth and the eye depth

Expand the shading a lot, and add some shading to the ears. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 07:17, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded 21:31, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit

Expand the chest shading. 01:59, December 4, 2017 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the face and muzzle. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 05:25, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading on the hip especially. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:37, December 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded 05:26, December 8, 2017 (UTC)

Redclaw (Alt. W 2) ~ For Approval
Comments? 20:22, December 6, 2017 (UTC)

there seems to be a dot of lighter color in the earpink? idk if it's my screen or not. + could you smooth the ear pink a small bit?

Reuploaded. 23:14, December 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:49, December 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:54, December 8, 2017 (UTC)

Palepaw (Lo) ~ For Approval
I've gotten nothin' 16:09, December 8, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! I like it! Anyway, is there a way you can make the side texture possibly flow with the arm texture? It looks kinda cut off. I apologize if that is the way it's supposed to look. <span style="">17:46, 12/08/2017