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Bloomheart (W) ~ For Approval
Well, I tried. This is my first in a while, sorry for the cruddiness. For the eyes, I didn't know what color they were so I went based off a really cool chart which I will link. They're hazel, like a greenish for Blooms? Flowers? Pink ears also based off what the same chart said was normal. 00:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. :) Add shading to the right side of the front leg. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Also, would you mind lightening the shading a tad? Correct me if I'm wrong 01:09, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Done so. Looks a bit better, did the MLP style of shading the back legs-  01:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the ear pink a bit bigger.

It would suck if you guys made me edit it so much and then regect it, but it's good practice  01:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye color 05:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. Remember, defining doesn't always mean darkening but it means making it less blurred. 07:53, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look too blurred, can you make them less blurred? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Pixlr crap and won't sharpen, if needed I will redraw those stripes //shot  11:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Redrew stripes, will fix them soon-  14:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the frontmost back leg. Please stop aligning your images.

Sorry, it looks really weird. I have to align it, it's the option? Now it's going > way, and really weird. Someone fix that please? Maybe a mod? Wow, this image is getting a lot of edits... Knowing my luck, within a week bam it'll be moved to declined. 18:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just remove the |thumb on the end. Anyway, the stripes are very blotchy, do you think you could thin them out and sharpen them a bit? And perhaps add more after that, since they're be thinner?

Reupload Redrew stripes. Right now I'm just waiting for it to be declined. 23:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay first, please stop saying that your image will be declined. You don't know this, and it could very well be approved like every other image on the approval page. It really seems like your trying to guilt trip us, honestly. Saying things like that will /not/ get your image approved faster. This image is very well done, so i see no reason why it shouldnt be approved at some point. As for the image, define the tail and foreleg shading please. 23:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Sorry, I didn't mean too... well, maybe I did, I'm a bit confused right now and I'll stop. Also, fixed the shading. I don't mean to guilt trip you guys, I'm...Not really good at control that stuff? I'll stop, promise. Fixed shading as well. 00:05, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink a bit more and smudge it a tad more. And like Breeze said, it is a wonderful image. I see nothing that'll make you think this will get declined. =) 06:13, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Just bumping OuO  12:25, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 20:41, 03/25/2015

Sorry, Fern... I can't really do that with pixlr. OnO; -- 23:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The whole thing looks overblurred. Also tone down the ear-pink a bit and erase the waste around the head 02:35, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Tried to use the sharpen tool, I will redraw the stripes or upload the backup w/o pixel effect??? Let me know if it needs to come to the whole redraw thing 11:36, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

i'd suggest redoing the stripes and blurring them less then. 21:35, 03/26/2015

There's some waste by the earpink, and also define the eye depth. 16:56, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading everywhere 18:11 Sun Mar 29

there's also a little bit of waste in the triangle where the legs are 18:15 Sun Mar 29

The earpink could also be dulled down a bit, as it is looking somewhat bright. 00:01, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's perfect for a mottled cat. Actually you should try using the fuzzy select tool to select the stripes and copy it to another layer and smuge/blur it again. Not sure if it works 01:21, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 04:57, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Splashfoot (W) ~ For Approval
My first charart, comments? Also, could someone tell me why this is coming out really small so I can fix it? 21:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Well firstly what program are you using, Icebreeze? 22:32, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

GIMP. 23:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, so maybe you're not making it full size. To do it, click on the blank on the charart page and click full size. Also, are you using layers? If not, make a layer and put the colors and add another layer for shading. Okay, so can you define the shading, please? 23:25, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for all the help, Tiger! Your suggestion about making it full size was very helpful, and I think I have a correctly sized blank now. Yes, I'm using layers, and I have defined my shading on my charart. I will re-upload tomorrow. Thanks again! =) 01:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The image needs to be bigger. It isn't the right size as the others. 03:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Anyways, why is the eye sort of... deformed? 08:35, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

It'll probably be fixed when they use the right size blank as they mentioned earlier. 11:37 Wed Mar 25

Re-upped Okay, at least the charart is the right size now 20:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The linear art was weird in some spots, tell me if you notice any more. 20:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the lineart is still blurred. File:Warriorlongm.gif <-- Save that file, clear the white parts, remove your current lineart layer, then paste this in as a new layer. If you don't understand what I'm saying, I can show you. Alternatively, you could just redo this completely with the file i linked you. 20:45, 03/25/2015

Add a little bit of light on the front leg. It looks like something out-of-sight is blovking it. Spottehwobble!

Re-upped I completely redid the image. I will add some more light on my next reupload, I didn't see your comment until it was too late, Spotteh 23:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading a little less blotchy, define the ear pink, and maybe use this as a reference for shading? 00:07, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the earpink on the back ear and there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. 01:23, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the edges of the shading on the hanch. 13:31, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ok, I redid the shading 21:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out some, and there's some waste around the image. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

remove the shading from the tip of the tail, and the shading is leaking at the bottom of the tail. put shading all up the backside of the tail 21:38, 03/26/2015

Re-upped 21:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the back,legs and end of the tail. Good job! 😃 -- 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the back, back legs, and on the part under the base of his tail 22:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Sun! =) 00:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and define the eye depth. Given the shading a good blur with a hard edged blur tool. 04:59, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 20:35, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Extend the tail shading and blur it, as well as the front leg shading. 22:16, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:33, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit, please. Also, clear up the waste near the front paw please. I think I'll make you an apprentice after this. 00:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:50, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking on the back spine and there is waste in the triangle area between the legs. 00:56, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

You seem to know what you are doing, so I'll go ahead and make you an apprentice. Also, can you expand the light on the haunch? 00:58, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks for making me an apprentice, Tiger! =D 02:02, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and light in the front legs? 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 13:37, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and blur the tail shading some. This is gorgeous! 03:31, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! 13:15, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

So there's kind of a lighter line running in the back. Can you put a bit of shading there to cover it. Also can you define the shading in the neck, end of the tail, and the front paw farthest away from us. 14:05, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 15:16, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, this looks much, much better than when you started. I really like it. c: Define the earpink just a tad, it's hard to see. 16:58, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you, Raven! 17:12, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's a rather hard-edged point on the hind leg/haunch maybe blur that out a bit 00:40, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

I really think it's ok. I'm guessing that if I blur it, someone will tell me to define it again. However, if someone else agrees I will. 00:48, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Not the entire shading, just one point at the hind leg. I'm not that experienced after all so I'll agree that when someone else also agrees with me :) he looks handsome, btw 00:52, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, especially at the near base of it, then give the shading there a good blur. 14:40, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ok, I tried. 21:08, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Just blur it a tad more on the tail. I think this is really good 04:57, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Burntclaw =) 20:22, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Thicken and define the shading on the head; it looks a little lacking compared to the rest of the body 22:26, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped That would be because I somehow forgot to shade the head 23:58, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and chest a bit more, and I think it'll be awesome. 01:46, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Thrushtalon (W) ~ For Approval
I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-; 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me. 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups The shading looks wwwwaaaaayyyyyyyy better, /not  19:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the shading some 20:46, 03/25/2015

re-up 21:10, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the stripes on the haunch on under his neck/chest; he's starting to toe the line of triangle tabby. Also, blur and lighten the shading on the back 21:11, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could lower the shading's opacity as well, because I can't see the stripes at all through it. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up re-did him and made him a mackerel tabby. Dont know if it was the right choice... 02:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and blur it more. You can try secondary shading as well but it's just a suggestion. 02:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I should darken the shading more '-' 02:41, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit? I <3 his stripes. 02:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also, can you smudge/blur the stripes a bit, too? 03:03, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the legs a tad 20:38 Sun Mar 29

re-up Did I answer everyone's questions? 01:53, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit more, it's still kind of hard edged. 13:27, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, honestly. Could you smudge the stripes a bit more? This is looking very nice!! 17:17, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna have to agree with Tiger, just blur/smudge the shading a bit more. 00:15, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Spiketail (D) ~ For Evaluation
Welp... first charart. Hopefully I don't chicken out or get arrogant and I didn't screw anything up /)-(\  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:45, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the pupils/eye color? I can't see any at all, and he needs to have them. Also, darken his base just a bit, and blur the main body shading a tad.

blur the shading a lot, and make the light on the bent leg more visible 11:35 Wed Mar 25

There is waste under at the outside of his chest. Pretty goood for your first one! 19:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed eye colour, redid with a darker grey. Eye colour was originally supposed to be grey until my lesson learned: Never put grey eyes on a grey cat. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Realized I messed up on shading. I'll start work on it tomorrow when I wake up or after I get home from the hospital. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:41, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Add pupils, if you want to look at examples, you can look at some of mine. 04:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added pupils (who ever knew eyes could be so difficult? I need new glasses). Might as well do this before I sleep since it's fast. Thank you for the examples, Foxy :) -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

You're welcome! If you need help you can always ask me. :) Now, just darken and define the shading and define the eye depth. We're getting there and he looks awesome. 10:49, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Is it okay if I can get a recommendation on what to set the blur rate to? I use Gaussian Blur on gimp. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:29, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, it depends on the blanks. I used to make 25 my very maximum for any blank, before I started smudging instead. Try stuff out, see how it looks. Gaussian blur tends to make look flat or occasionally blotchy, though. Try using the blur tool on a high rate if you have trouble finding a good setting for guassian blur. 18:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere Russettail13 (talk) 02:09, March 28, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Could I get some assistance on trying to shade in GIMP? I know, it sounds stupid but somehow, GIMP just doesn't want me to shade correctly anymore. I tried using the smudge tool (though I suck at smudging), I tried using the blur tool, and I even tried using gaussian blur. For gaussian blur, the option was greyed out. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Try a hard edged blur tool and blur the edges only at a rate of 100, make sure the mode is RGB. It you would like I could make a tutorial for you. I suggest not using the smudge tool until you have more practice. However if you do decide to use it use a hard edged smudge tool at the rate of 60 depending on how much you want it smudged and smudge the shading towards the direction of fur. Sigh with ~ please. 03:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dang it! I forgot, thank you for reminding me. That's what I get for being sleepy. I'll try, but if it doesn't succeed, I'll redo the image. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded After getting SkyClan's Destiny, munching on some candy, and finding my glasses, I finally found out why it wouldn't shade. It wasn't on RGB. Sorry if there seems to be a lack of change. I set gaussian blur to 20 and made the eyes brighter. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:40, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit more.

Reuploaded I have an uneasy feeling that I blurred too much, since I'm not sure if I can really see the shading, but I could be wrong. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:28, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I might give this a thorough check again. I bumped down the blurring rate to about 27.5 ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:19, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bumped it down to 26. Still using Gaussian Blur because I'm lazy. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:27, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bumped it down to 24. Didn't like it at 26. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:24, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading quite a bit. 10:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took shading down to about 23 or 22. I spy a bit of waste so I'll get at that immediately. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bye bye, waste. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:54, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

No, I meant make it more visible, not less visible. I can't see the shading right now. 23:42, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I had a hard day and can't think >< I can't even remember to stop aligning the image. I feel stupid.

Reuploaded Hopefully this bad day doesn't stretch on for me. Anyway, I blurred and adjusted a bit. At first I thought I didn't see the shading, but it was because of my glasses. I'm still pretty unsure though. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:11, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Its fine, everyone makes mistakes now and again. As for the image, define the foreleg shading. You did beautifully on this Skid. =) 01:41, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :D (I hope the changes are showing)

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval
My first medicine cat, and I love his name. ^.^ Comments? 19:09, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the texture more? Beautiful! And can you define the shading everywhere? Im having a hard time seeing it. 19:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks =) but if ya don't mind I'm gonna ask for a second opinion on the texture, just because I really like the way it turned out, but if someone else agrees I'll smudge it a bit more. I did define the shading, however. 20:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

just lower the opacity a bit more, the way you smudged it is fine 20:47, 03/25/2015

Sorry, but you're going to need to match this image, as we have confirmation that the cats listed in the allegiances of Firestar's Quest are the same cats in Mapleshade's Vengeance. This means removing the texture- I apologize.

Re-uploaded. Ah I see. And you're fine, who would've known other than the author herself? But I must say I'm a tad confused. Does that mean instead of^^ this Sloefur being male does he have to be a female? And also have long fur to match the other one? And have the same file name as the original since they're exactly the same cat? 22:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, everything needs to match- from the gender down to the pelt length. Sorry, that's just how we work- If Vicky says they're the same, then we don't have a choice. Gender can easily be changed later with the lineart, so that's no big deal. It just needs to match.

Re-uploaded. k he's now a she, and long-furred. 22:15, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit, please.

Define the earpink just a little? 10:48, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)Russet

i think the definition is fine, but i think it could be blurred a lot 20:42 Sun Mar 29

K I'll reupload tomorrow. Sorry, had a lot of work this week. 03:04, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Ugh editor isn't working, can someone help me? What should I do? I need to upload it again and it won't let me upload my cat. .-. 13:47, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

just upload to tinypic 13:49, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Mk. That ^^ isn't current, just so all know. 15:15, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (K) ~ For Approval
Hiya. 04:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make him more brown? 04:56, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading- I can barely tell it's there.

Define the earpink too, please. 22:18, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:12, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Is his base brown or black? Because tbh it looks black/dark gray.

'''Re-uploaded. '''It was a very dark brown on the orange side of the color wheel. 16:58, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks black... idk it might be my monitor (which it's horrible with blacks and browns), but it really looks black with brown shading or some stuff like that.

He looks brown to me, very dark brown, but brown all the same. 19:03, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it may be your monitor Jayce. Right now hes actually fairly lighter than the start, with slightly darker brown markings. 23:33, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a touch? Great job he's beautiful! Russettail13 (talk) 00:06, April 1, 2015 (UTC)Russet

His shading is already on 100% opacity, and also barely smudged compared to some of my other images. Do you mind if i get a second opinion on that? 01:36, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W)~ For Approval
Sorry for not posting sooner I just got a new lap top and had to redo some stuffs. Anywho, here's Midgey. 11:49, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

he needs patches in his fur. 11:50, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the eyes...? All I see is the default area- did you forget to give him pupils and such?

Reups Oh my xD how could I miss the eyes if all things? 12:30, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There are still no pupils, also define the tail shading 13:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I reupped the wrong one lel. I added the defined shading though (this time I chose the right one xD) 14:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

where's yer light source? the haunch says one way, the chest says the other 21:40, 03/26/2015

Define the light on the legs, please, as well as the shading on the head. 22:46, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 17:27, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the neck shading a tad? 00:21, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

i can see it fine, to be honest 11:51 Mon Mar 30

Define the light on the tail and the back legs. 14:38, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:00, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (W) ~ For Approval
My first warrior. For the chest, I tried to go for a soft look (feather soft!) 02:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the feather softness was in reference to the fur's feel and not necessarily the color. Thicken the shading on the back and define it on the head, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. 02:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I know, I thought just the lighter chest is fitting, and tried to make it look soft. 02:55, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Unless he's said to have a lighter-colored chest, I think it should be removed. It's allowed on tabbies because they usually have them.

Blur the shadin more 10:46, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Make the base color a little less gingery? Russettail13 (talk) 16:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Reupload 23:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

He looks really orange, make him brown just a little more. 04:29, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Now he looks kinda green... <span style="">22:45 Sat Mar 28

Reupload goodness hope his not feeling sick XD. 23:00, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tone down the ear pink a little and define the light on the legs. 11:04, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

It still looks a bit greener than brown. 14:08, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks kinda blotchy, smooth it out a bit? <span style="">20:43 Sun Mar 29

Reupload I can't change his colour away from green anymore. His starting to look ginger again. 22:07, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

He actually looks like an old version of Oakheart's tawny alt... Might I suggest a shade around #A06F44? That's the color I used for Grasspelt. He's still looking a bit ginger on my screen.

Reupload thanks for that. 00:02, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

she shading is still a tad blotchy on the neck. smooth it out a little more? <span style="">11:45 Mon Mar 30

Reupload I just read the book again and his mentioned to have the same soft shade of brown as at least Petalkit, so I colour-picked off her image. Credit to Petalkit's OA. :) 21:56, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more 06:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I've redone the tail shading since it is leaking away from the lineart. I've also got the eyes to match Patchkit's eyes, since it is mentioned to have matched. Credit to the OA of Patchkit's image. 07:03, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink a bit more. He also looks a touch on the shiny side 22:25, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I think the shiny fits, he has glossy fur. 22:34, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Rainfall (W) - CBA
Black cats are hard to deal with. 09:17, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit.

re ups that's why I thought it looked so weird 0.0 09:23, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit more. 20:17, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

In my own opinion I think if I lighten it more it'll be invisible. 02:12, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, the shading's fine, just define the ear pink a little and I think this will be ready. 04:20, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  10:29, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 10:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but please lighten the shading a few ticks. The shading was fine how it was here.

also please blur it a ton <span style="">20:44 Sun Mar 29

I'm sorry but I can't see anything on the picture you showed me @Jayce maybe I'll check it closed up when I get back home tonight. 00:32, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups lightened the shading quite a lot and made the texture more visible. 14:37, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

the back shading looks really dark? maybe lighten it up a tad bit more and define the shading on the front legs a bit <span style="">21:22 Mon Mar 30

The back shading darkness matches the one Jayce posted... 03:19, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. re-CBA? 06:24, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Petalkit (MV) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Made her belly a little fluffy. :3

Smudge the ear pink just a little more? 11:18, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Smudged it a little more, I hope you can see it. ^^"

I kinda can't see the ear pink at all- perhaps change the shade of it a bit?

Reedshine (MV) (Q) ~ CBA
01:31, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define all leg shading? 02:20, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you also define the tail shading a tad? 02:59, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

^^^ Aswell as the facial shading, please. I can barely see it. 03:44, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded ugh forgot how nnoying dark orange cats are 04:15, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck maybe? or my eyes might be failing me...I'm in the sun. 16:29, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading on the back two legs (like the actual back legs near her rump) a bit. Also, is there shoulder shading? Remember, I told you that my monitor's a bit off rn, so I think the shading and how I see it might be too..

re-uploaded ୧༼ಠ益ರೃ༽୨ there is, i think it's your monitor this time 03:01, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 05:31, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry David, but could you define the belly shading for me? I can't see it. 17:27, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded i am not defining the shading anywhere anymore. 01:50, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reedshine is a lovely lady. CBA? 02:10, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Milkfur (MV) (W) - CBA
Lets approve this quick before I eat her base color is pure white so please do not tell me to change it 06:16, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Wrong file name whoops can someone rename it please 06:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'll get that. You're gonna need to change something, because she looks a bit brownish-cream, and if she's supposed to be white, that's what she's supposed to be.

Re-uped Lowered the opacity of the texture that was causing the problem. Without the shading she is actually really white now. 06:27, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

she still looks cream. 06:33, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped This shading came from hell I think 06:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She looks so good and tasty but I think she does look cream. Maybe tint her a little closer to blue? Idk 06:46, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I would really not rather tint her blue bc the style, without the shading she is pure white. I tried lightening up the shading a little bit if that helps. 06:52, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

something needs to be done, because shes still looking cream. 03:42, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's the shading or the texture thats making her cream... 03:52, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

What I meant by tinting to blue is the texture and/or shading. 05:15, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ew 10:38, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry to say, but she looks kinda... green? for some reason :\ maybe you should try black... I think I'm just directing you to make a mess but I'm trying to help... white cats are tough too :PPP 11:11, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

How does she look green????? And I tried black, it doesn't fit well with the shading style I'm probably gonna redo this dumb shading if I can't get it to look right. Sorry for constantly opposing you, but I don't think it looks green at all. 11:18, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't look green the slightest imo 11:20, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't make it clear, it just looks sorta teal XP but the shading and texture look so awesome. I don't really suggest redoing it unless there are no other ways. I think it might look good if it's a purplish blue - if you get what you mean? I've never done this before so I don't know anything  :o 11:28, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, can you humor me and lighten the shading a bit, and upload it somewhere that I can see it? I'm not saying you need to do it here- I just want to see what it looks like with a bit lighter shading... that might solve the coloring issue.

Tinypic was being a pain and China won't let me access Ezimba so I uploaded it over my personal image. 11:52, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

That's fine and I think the lightened shading works. Go ahead and upload that to this- I love how it looks. It's not overly dark and you can clearly see it. Kinda reminds me a bit of Blizzardwing's chararts, actually...

Re-upped Thank you =D 12:02, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I added a new layer of shading depth because I noticed the image looked a little flat. Also I expanded the tail shading and now I'm so much happier with this, I actually like the shading. 12:59, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail and neck just a tad. This is lovely. 17:01, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I smudged it, I didn't blur my shading, so I smudged it more instead. 04:49, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the back leg closest to us, and the light on the front leg closest to us <span style="">11:42 Mon Mar 30

Re-upped Please do not tell me to define the shading further- as I can see it fine- any more definition and the color will be off again. 14:28, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

I love how it looks now :D It does look quite like Blizzardwing and I like his image. I think this is fine 09:30, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, I'm not gonna ask you to define it. I'll CBA it instead.

Birchface (Ki) - CBA
Welcome to the jungle, we got fun and games. All colors are from the warrior.

Define the shading on the legs 10:47, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tiny precious bundle of fur. *.* I may hate these blanks but they make some damn cute images.

blur/smudge the shading on the legs a tad? <span style="">11:40 Mon Mar 30

I'm gonna hold off on that, since it would basically contradict what Burnt told me to do- I'd be back where I started, since I didn't define the shading all that much.

I actually like this, let's go CBA 05:30, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Perchpaw (MV) (A) ~ For Approval
Oh dear, he looks too much like Clear Sky X.X 12:27, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh I like Clear Sky quite a lot :o maybe define the head shading and shading on the back? 12:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:33, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the ear over there <--- and connect the shading on the tail to the shading on back leg? 16:25, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is connected from the back leg to the tail, as far as I can see =/ and I think the ear is fine, it's lighter because it's not shaded. Anyway, great job, this is beautiful! 16:52, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

can you lighten or blur or something to the face shading, it kinda makes him look like a raccoon lel 17:43, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did some other stuff as well. 04:36, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the facial shading a bit more? Lovely job! 17:25, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I can't quite tell where your light source is 22:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Seedpelt (Alt W) ~ For Approval
idk <span style="">17:15 Sat Mar 28

Weren't she and the other Seedpelt said to be the same cat? And if so, shouldn't she match the other Seedpelt's description? 17:34, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

it would be an alt now, it should just be renamed and it'll be fine. 17:42, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-named. Also, brighten up the white a bit on the muzzle and tail.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I remember that alts had to match the normal images in terms of fur length, so, shouldn't this be short-furred, like the other image. 23:13, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/Smudge the white more and define the earpink. 23:55, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't Seedpelt match her new description? 03:54, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

this is an alt, not the warrior. 03:55, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more, it's a bit hard edged. 14:11, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

practically redid it the reason it didn't match the normal image before is because i didn't see that they were the same cat. <span style="">18:10 Sun Mar 29

Can you blur the shading a bit more? 20:31, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

it looks fine to me, but if someone else agrees then i will its smudged not blurred <span style="">21:16 Sun Mar 29

I'm gonna agree with Tiger here. Please smudge it, if you don't blur it. 21:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs while your at it. 02:39, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more 04:37, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

reups i should probably smudge the neck shading anymore but eh i'll probably be told to do it anyway <span style="">11:38 Mon Mar 30

Define the tail shading and smudge the shading a lot on the haunch. Smudge the white towards the direction of fur. 14:34, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">01:21 Wed Apr 1

Ravenwing (MCA) ~ For Approval
Why did I choose a black cat that was a bad idea. I just realized he needs a black nose, too, so I'll fix that next upload 21:38, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him up a lot, he looks gray. 21:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 22:01, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten him a shade or so, I can't see the shading. 22:25, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Larkwing (FQ) (Alt MC) ~ For Approval
Well. -Everything is awesome starts playing- 03:18, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more? 04:15, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading depth? 04:47, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Define the shading on the front leg farthest from us, please. 05:28, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading a bit? <span style="">11:32 Mon Mar 30

Is it alright if I leave the stripes like that because I really can't smudge it without looking really bad. 13:25, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

you could probably blur them a little bit cuz they just need to be a little less hard edged, an people seem to forget smudging isnt mandatory. 13:26, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

I dunno, I don't think they need to be blurred. But that's just me. Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:56, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Add a couple stripes to the head and smudge the strip by the eye. Also, define and darken the shading on the head and define the ear-pink 03:40, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Just blur them a bit please. Maybe it won't look as bad as you think it will. this actually is looking quite lovely. =) 17:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you~ 00:04, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Ki) - For Approval
16:18, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the spots morre? Looks fabulous, Raven :3 19:06, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Bramble. c: 19:40, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and the tail. I think you matched it really well, well done. 00:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a touch on the greenish side. Try shading with a dark red/reddish brown 03:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see your light source, the head is telling me that it is coming from ==> and the rest from <== 03:53, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I used a different program for the shading, so it should look a lot better now. 13:11, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on ==> side of the cat 13:15, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:23, March 31. 2015 (UTC)

Sorry to be constantly nagging your image, but I don't really see any change. Shading depth is the gradient from light to dark, and since it would be darker as light fades, I suggest addng another layer of shading at a lower opacity other on the edge of the image if that made sense lol 13:31, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded No, it's fine, you're not nagging! I did that before and I didn't see much of a change either, and I didn't realize until I reuploaded it. It should be fixed now. 13:38, March 31, 2015, (UTC)

Maybe change the shading demensions and/or darkness a tad, the spots are merging with the shading. Lookin good!! 17:21, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Lightened the shading a tad. 21:20, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think adding a bit of light wouldn't hurt to put on the hindpaw in this lovely image. 00:07, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Alt W 2) - For Approval
Frecklewish was described as pale ginger, so she gets an alt for that. Blech, that shading did not turn out at all like I was hoping. I was trying to make her fur look longer, but it didn't come across like I'd hoped. I might redo it on the next upload. I am pretty happy with the pattern, though. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:01, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Clean up the shading around the head, or lay over another layer of shading over the whole thing. Also, since she's been described as ginger, she might be a tabby now... 03:38, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I worked with the shading more, I think it looks better now. And I think she's still speckled, but I'm not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:40, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks... Spiky. Could you make the shadng a tad denser there? Also, if she's ginger, I do think she should be a tabby, but that might be just me. 04:55, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

It's meant to look spiky - the tail of a long-haired cat is going to be made of a lot of tufts of fur spiking out. If i make it denser or blur it, it's going to look more like a blob, which isn't as accurate. And I think she's supposed to be speckled because it's part of her regular description, and ginger is just a partial alt, so she'd be a speckled ginger rather than her usual speckled golden. I think that's how it works. But I'm not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:03, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

What I'm trying to say is, the shading doesn't blend well with the fur. I'd suggest adding texture if you are going to shade this way, I find that texture and shading blend well together. For the stripes thing I'm not too sure, disregard me if you think it's fine. 05:27, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I like the shading over all but adding texture might be a good idea as well. Maybe smooth out the front leg and back shading. And I still love your shading style  yesterday I tried it and failed absolutely terribly :PPP how can you even to it 0.0 09:37, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you can be cheeky with the tabby situation and put faint tabby stripes underneath her speckles. That would work, you're basically adding extra detailing than anything else. ;) 10:17, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt. W) - For Approval
- ...welp... I think I might redo her tabby pattern 17:29, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten up her tail a bit? 17:32, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Imo she looks fine. 20:55, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

if you smudged the stripes, maybe smudge 'em a little more? if you didn't then it's fine <span style="">00:02 Wed Apr 1

I love her pattern and texture. I can't see an unsaid problem. how did you even do this 01:46, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:33, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Alt. W3) - For Approval
Brownie Freckle 19:52, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink, thicken and darken the shading on the back of the haunch and on the tail, and blur it on the chest, flank, and foreleg 22:21, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt. W 3) ~ For Approval
Was called golden all the way back in Rising Storm. I basically took , changed the base, line art, and eyes, messed around with the shading a bit, then added the texture. I think it's optional to have stripes on a golden cat, but I'm not 100% sure, so tell me if I'm wrong. Anyways, comments?

She is looking a bit more orange than golden right now, so can you adjust the base color a bit? Also, can you darken the shading a bit as I can't really see it? 20:49, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the shading, but kept the color. It is actually very golden; if you were to take away all but the base layers, you would see it. 21:02, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, It really isn't golden in my computer screen. It still looks really orange and yellow. I would suggest saying what Bramble said before... 21:05, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the base yellow, since I couldn't really make it any more golden. 21:13, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I wouldn't  make it yellow nor orange. I would go to a colour finder and stuff and find a golden colourcode and put it as the base.. 21:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I did; This is the color I used for her base originally. 21:34, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a touch on the neon side.. Try a paler shade of yellow/brown as the base 22:12, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:29, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading a little bit? 22:50, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but I'll change it if others agree. 23:14, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Golden is a form of ginger, so im pretty sure she needs stripes? I may be wrong though. 23:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

She looks really neon. Tone her base down a little? I also think she already has stripes, if i'm not mistaken. <span style="">00:02 Wed Apr 1

Reuploaded. 00:38, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry, but she still looks more orange than golden. Perhaps make her stripes more of a golden/golden brown color? 01:33, April 1, 2015 (UTC)