Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Creekfeather (W) ~ Redone
OA's were Cloudskye, Elorisa. Needed to be redone to match the kit ~. Comments? :3 22:26, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that ear pink. 22:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the stripes on the apprentice more closely. They need to be darker, more textured, and they need to conform to the shape of his body. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

His main coloring needs to be a bit darker to match as well. Also, try to match the ear pink on the other images and don't have it so low that it leaks into his forehead. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Uh Shelly, the apprentice is being redone to match the kit. 01:31 Thu Mar 29

The stripes don't match the kit, either, and the kit is essentially the apprentice with thinner stripes. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. (Sorry if what Shelly already said covers this). 06:41, 29, 03, 2012

Re-uploaded. I don't think the changes are showing. I fixed the stripes and they match a whole lot better. Blurred the earpink as well. 19:16, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the ear pink more triangular and less neon-y. 02:26, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not changing the colour since it matches the kit, same hex code. :3 10:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly add more stripes but not all the way across? 14:00 Tue Apr 3

Make the earpink less neon and a bit more triangular. 21:29, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Done. Mounty, regarding the stripes, they match the kit and the apprentice I've half-finished. :3 Also, changes might not be showing, so it's here: http://www.iaza.com/work/120404C/iaza18777759259200.png 00:04, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink still doesn't look right, in my opinion. Define the shading a tiny bit. 10:59, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, can you Shelly? I don't want to waste time trying to get them right. 15:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

My pleasure. I re-uploaded it, here's the changes since they won't show regularly: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/9/96/20120402190120!Ferncloud.kit.png 19:02, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste down by her paw on ---> side. 20:45, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart also seems a little thick on her left hind paw... 01:54, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks Shelly~ 19:57, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked
Eh...I just realized I forgot her facial stripes...and the stripes on the lower part of her hind leg...I'll add those in in a bit. I'm the OA, and she needed stripes on her legs, tail, and face. Comments? 16:22, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added those in. Changes are here. 03:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little more? 01:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you centre the earpink a bit more please? 02:08, 04, 04, 2012
 * You don't have to if you don't want to. 02:52, 06, 04, 2012

Reuploaded. I'd rather not...it's about as centered as it can get. Changes are here. 14:06, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try to match the stripes on the kit? I really don't want to tweak them again, sorry. I also got rid of the spots among the stripes since, on a spotted tabby, the spots don't mix with the stripes on the points. (points being legs, tail, and face) 00:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think the stripes on the alt queen are fine. If memory serves, I think Leggy had this reserved for the stripes first, and this seems a lot easier to match on other images. No offense, but I can't really tell what the stripes are on the kit, and even if I could, it'd be hard to match since the kit blank is a lot smaller, then the queen. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mitzi (KP) (Q) - Redone
changes aren't showing. redone to match queen. Original artist was leafstrike. changes are herre~  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:42, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and enlarge the earpink. ^^ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 14:02, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit? 23:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 03:41, April 5, 2012 (UTC)'''

Blur the shading, and some of the shading along the bottom of the belly is edging away from the lineart. 03:58, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the collar a bit? It looks like it's choking her. 06:00, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the tail? 16:22, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes aren't showing >.<  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 23:20, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Snaketail (P3) (E) ~ Redone
And here's Snaketail :3 OAs were Ashshadow, Elorisa, Ivystripe, Thistleberry, and Paleclaw. Comments? 10:57, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Add a few more stripes to teh tail and blur tje stripesm earpinmk, and shading. Cute :D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 13:10, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

His description mentions that he has a gray flecked chin, so, could you add it? Nice~ :3 13:53, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading. Pretty C: 13:55 Tue Apr 3

Rename this Snaketail (P3).elder.png. 17:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:25, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the gray flecks gray, and put them moreso on his chin. Also define the shading a bit. 00:43, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and maybe thicken it? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 00:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:22, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Bouncefire (W) ~ Redone
I channeled Mounty when I did this. I swear I did. Comments? 05:08, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful~ Make the ear pink a bit more red~ 18:55, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Crowtail (W) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows. Stripes were unnatural. Cloudy got a black tabby<3 18:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

So purdy~<3 Enlargen the ear pink and add stripes to her legs ^^ 18:53, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 8D 18:59, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the stripes a bit? You should barely be able to see them on black cats (lol, this looks just like Hollyleaf with stripes). 19:50, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:08, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Any chance of you making the stripes darker than the main coat instead of lighter? I've never seen a black tabby with lighter stripes, but I have seen on with darker. 01:06, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I asked Shelly about this already, actually, and she told me I should keep the stripes lighter.
 * [4/5/2012 7:33:54 PM] Shelly: Tabby stripes on a black cat are actually rippling in the fur that shows the skin underneath a bit. So the stripes are lighter than the fur.

So, yeah. 01:11, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yup. Like this guy. Black tabbies are really rare (it's hard to show that gene in this color of fur), and their "stripes" usually only amount to rippling fur. They're called ghost tabby markings, and aren't even real stripes. Sometimes kittens can appear to be black cats with tabby markings like this little guy, but their stripes are actually very dark brown and usually fade to solid black as they grow. Of course, there's always the weird cats... trust me just look here for all the weird patterns you can get.

However, black tabby usually refers to brown tabbies with black stripes. But since it's evident that the Erins don't study cat genetics, it's best to take them literally and make a black cat with ghost stripes. I'd say it's artist's choice with this description: you can either go with a black cat that has ghost stripes or a brown cat with black stripes. 03:39, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) ~ Redone
White kitteh~ <333 OA was LightMoon with a redo by Rowan. Shading was flat. Comments for improvement? File changes aren't showing...yet. 19:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) ~ Withdrawn
Finally. I've been /so/ lazy about this...anyway, comments? :3 22:30, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Straighten out the stripes like his other images, fill in the entire ear with earpink as it seemed to blur away from the lineart, lower the opacity on the earpink, and define the shading on the tail and face/neck. 23:08, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on another charart.~ And I really don't like the pattern anyway. 12:47, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) ~ Redone
Uh yeah. I don't know how to make blossom shaped white patches, but this is all I got (inspired by Okami 8D) OA was Icestorm and Mintstarr. Comments? 23:36 Fri Apr 6

Make the white patches a bit more white and blur the tail shading~ 23:40, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This is as blurred as the tail will go now. 23:47 Fri Apr 6

This looks so much better now 8D. Make the ear pink a tad smaller. 23:50, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Silver 8D 23:58 Fri Apr 6

So purdy 8D Blur the neck shading >///< 02:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Misty <33 03:10 Sat Apr 7

Shrewtooth (W) - Redone
Comments? :3 OA was Dappleclaw. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ;3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)