Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Speckletail (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine; redone to match her other images. 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the stripes a tad and blur them? 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 00:50, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and blur the shading on the belly. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh darn, I was kinda hoping to do this one. Oh well I've got plenty of images on my to-do list. XD Anyways, great job! Lighten and desaturate the whole image just a bit though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's this big patch of yellow waste near her tail, so erase that. xD 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and there's patches of yellow waste on her head, above our far front leg, and along her back. 02:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, they look brown like the pelt :3 02:58, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes lighter still. 03:31 Wed Nov 30

Re-Uploaded. 23:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the shading just a tad? ^^ 14:58, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make her less green? Maybe it's just my computer, but she looks tinted green. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:04, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed, Paleclaw. The colours are a bit off. 08:09 Sun Dec 4

Re-Uploaded. 22:51, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading to match her other images. 00:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (W) - Tweak
OA was Mistystar & the white needed to be smudged, but I couldnt get it to look like the patches so I smudged everything. - 03:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and darken the shading. 03:29 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded.- 03:36, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it a bit more? 03:37 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded - 03:43, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the original artist was Shadowedheart, then redone by Mistystar. Blur the earpink. 18:04, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And redden it a tad as well :P 21:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 17:42, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it a tad smaller. This is booootiful <3 08:13 Sun Dec 4

Aw dangit, and just when I lost the layers to it Dx Hold on, I'll see what I can do - 20:25, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, sorry it took so long. - 23:40, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Center it a little bit and blur the tail tip. 23:44, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

"It", Sandstorm? What is "it"? Blur the earpink and dodge it a bit. 02:41 Tue Dec 6

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Blizzardpelt, tweaked by Splashpelt, needed to be lightened, comments? 01:41, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a tad. ^-^ 02:25, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just here to say, I actually took it over and got it approved from Blizzardpelt :3 23:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:04, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur this < ears ear-pink. and center it, it looks to close to the left sides lineart. 23:22 Sat Dec 3

I think the earpink is fine...feel free to disagree with me. 15:28, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it a bit, Stoney. Not much though. 20:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste between his tail and chest. 23:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Meh. 04:25, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rockshade (W) ~Redone


Okay, before y'all lose your minds, Oblivion gave me premission to de ro him, becuase everytime i re-did him, he looked like barf, and if i lightend his color, THAT color would become his lineart color, and it annoyed me, so, i asked to re-do him, and, got this, i know he looks dark-gray, but this is version one of him, and if anyone wants to see version two, just comment, and i'll up load version two. Now then, Comments? (PLEASE ask for version two, i hate this one >.>) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, OA was TottalyTawnypelt, and was then taken over by Frostheart <3, and the highlights and shading was blotchy, and he needed a small, stupmy tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, i went with version number two, 'cause, i hated how the first one looked >.> I like this one, MUCH better....so.....please comment. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:36, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur that shading tons. Thicken it as well. 02:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, a comment! Reuploaded, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:52, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading on the back, make the highlight smaller, and smooth out the shading; it looks really streaky and botchy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:05, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mind lightening the whole image? It's hard to tell which from which. And spread out the shading, along with smoothing it as Scarlet said above me. 23:06, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, give me a few mins, sorry i wans't on yesterday, I had to babysit Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 18:50, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, Reuploaded-I think his highlights look blotchy now that i made them smaller.....but....i'll blur them into oblivion before i upload them again. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:05, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploading -I blurred the shading and highlights, and fixed some blurred lineart, and added depth to the eye out of bordem.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:30, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is still very blotchy. Blur the shading on 100% with a big brush, it usually helps. If you use layers, gaussian blur the heck outta this puppy 22:38, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say redo the shading. Use a tutorial if you need help. Make him lighter as well. 23:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, i'll see what i can do. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:15, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I just re-did the image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:51, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:56, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it more. 01:52, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore, it has NO effect. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:17, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If you can't blur it more, I suggest withdrawing this image, then. I'm not saying you couldn't do it, but this shading isn't good enough to be approved. You could try and redo it, but I doubt that it would make a difference. Try Gaussian Blur 10 if you use GIMP. 02:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If you want, I could help you blur the shading. 04:40, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If Maple isn't going to blur this, you could probably just take over, Moonleaf. 08:21 Sun Dec 4


 * sighs* Look, moon, if you can help me blur it, great. If not, i'll re-do it, but i can't blur it anymore. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:54, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Here you go. :). I had to re-do the shading. 00:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:35, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, soory, thought you took over ^^; Thanks, but i liked him better with blue eyes, so i'll change that back, if you dont mind. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:38, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I thought he was more realistic with amber eyes, since pure black cats can't have blue eyes, but you're welcome to do that. ^^

Correction: I found out they can have blue eyes. 00:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I defined his highlights, left the shading, as it was fine, and gave him blue eyes, 'cause blue ish my fave color, and his eye color isnt stated. So, comments (Moon, i owe you one :) ) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:52, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it more, and redden the earpink. Honestly, I liked amber better, but I guess it IS the artist's choice... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him so the shading is noticeable. Also, the eye colour has to match his kit. 01:18, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rename is it Rockshade.warrior.png as well. 01:19, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

His kit needs to be tweaked, his shading and highlights.....*Shudders* That needs to be fixed. amd his kit's tail needs to be shorter, i'll do his kit image if need be. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Just leave his eyes amber. Blue eyes are much more uncommon than amber. If it's not broken, don't fix it. 01:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Still say his kit image needs tweaking, but, okay, i'll make his eyes amber, i'll fix his eyes in a sec. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 01:36, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Purdy (KP) - Redone
OA was Insane. The old colors didn't match and the pattern looked all smudgy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I don't think he would be all scraggly and torn like that when he was a kittypet, he probably got the tears and scars when he was a loner 05:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. His old charart had torn fur, so I'm going to leave that for now. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:27, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless, what Ivy said makes sense. I don't think he should have those patches either. 16:22, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when he got the patches, so I say just keep them. Maybe he got into fights as a kittypet or something. Anyways, it's what makes Purdy...well, Purdy! Keep 'em, Scarlet. 17:31, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste near his right foreleg. 01:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

The non-tabby part of the fur almost looks gray to me, dunno if that's just me or not. Did you color-pick from his elder? 01:15, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivy, yeah I did.

Blur the earpink and saturate the non-tabby part of the fur so it matches the elder. Also add some mottles to the tabby stripes so it matches the elder. Lookin' good, gurlll 08:22 Sun Dec 4

Re-uploaded.

Erase the waste to the far left of the image and make the shading on the collar more consistent by blurring it a bunch. Looks good ^^ 02:44 Tue Dec 6

Snaketail (P3) (W) - Tweaked
It really is tweaked. Honest. XD Anyways, shading was extremely blotchy so I just pretty much redid it, I added gray flecks to his chin, and gave him a torn ear. OA was Bramble maybe? Not sure. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the gray flecks, at first, I thought it was waste. 22:37, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Hey Shelly....  Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 22:40, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ye know what, he was described with grey flecks on his chin as an elder, and that seems like something that would come from age, so would he really need it on his warrior? And I'll blur the shading once I get another opinion on the grey flecks Sky. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:01, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably from old age, and since the description was given while he was an elder, it shouldn't be on his warrior image. xD 23:33, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make me wait, geez. xD The torn ear seems a. Bit pointy, can ya fix that? Hey Shelly....  Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 03:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay, removed the gray, blurred the shading, and I redid the ear because I really hated how I did it. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

LOL, the top of his tear looks like a rectangle. Make it more triangle-y :3 23:53, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't edit that part of the ear though....? I only added the tear in the side, I did nothing to the top... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:11, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (Lo) - Redone
BWAHAHAHAHA first image for a while. Color didn't match her leader image, shading/highlights needed to be redone. Blah blah blah. OA was Sandstar12. 20:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Snow, you need to darken your sig so people can read it... Anyway, the eyes on the leader have a ring of orange in them. 22:34, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 23:31 Fri Dec 2

Blur the shading. 16:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. -- 15:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 16:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Wolfheart (W) ~ Redone
I could not tweak that image. Simple as that. OA was Ashshadow, and the shading needed to be redone, and it looked like there was something wrong with the highlights/whatever they are. 04:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading where the haunch starts. (If you know what I mean). Also, there is a light gray part on the front back leg, can you fix that? 16:20, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Just redid the shading. 16:55, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight a bit bigger and blur it. 17:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I do not normally use highlights. There aren't any on this. Hollyleaf was a one-time thing. 17:10, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, if I have to spell it out for you, I mean the area on the haunch where there's no shading. Make that bigger and blur it. 17:13, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

You know what, I've about had it with your cocky attitude. Either be nice about it (and stop assuming things), or don't comment on my images at all. 17:17, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm just trying to help. Sorry, but I'm not used to people being so particular about what comments they receive. I'm used to someone saying highlights and the other person figuring out what it means. I get that you don't use highlights, and I shouldn't have assumed. 17:19, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm known here for not using highlights. I only used it on Hollyleaf because I wanted to try something new. I like it when people are descriptive and specific on my images, because I see exactly what I need to fix. 17:24, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

All right, I'll remember that next time :) There's a small line of light grey on her back. Add shading there. 17:25, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's from bluring, that much I can tell you. I overblurred on the back. 17:29, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a small line of lighter gray on her back and her haunch: darken it? Blur the earpink a bit, too. Looks good. 08:24 Sun Dec 4

What God-forsaken gray line are you talking about? It's not there. The changes were probably not showing or something, because I know there's shading there. 15:44, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's some lighter grey on her heel, could you fill that in? 23:52, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:00, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the head and I'm sorry, but I can still see the lighter gray line along her back: darken it. <span style="">02:47 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. Just re-did it. 02:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Violet (KP) - Tweak
Made it lighter. OA was Nightfall101. Comments? 17:43, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make 'er even lighter. <span style="">23:33 Sat Dec 3

Tone down the hightlights a bit. <span style="">23:35, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011

Re-Uploaded - Wait for changes to show - It was on the list to make lighter, so, sorry, but I'm not touching the highlights. 23:38, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading some, though. The colour is perfect, but the shading needs to be darker. <span style="">23:40 Sat Dec 3

Re-Uploaded 23:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me or is she starting to look kinda gray? <span style="">08:26 Sun Dec 4

It's not just you, she does look a little gray. :3 Can you define the earpink? 15:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 02:48, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Could you redden the earpink a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:50, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - ^^ 02:58, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Do you use layers? If so, add a layer of light shading and lower the opacity so it doesn't make it gray again when you darken the shading like I'm asking you to right now XD <span style="">02:59 Tue Dec 6

Re-Uploaded - Yep, I use layers. 03:10, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I know that earpink is like nearly impossible on this color, but could you make it a bit less purple? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:14, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (R)- Tweaked
She needed a scarred head. I luff Mapleshade. 8D <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 00:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scars, and make them more of a fleshy color. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:11, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste above the base of her tail. 01:13, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No idea how the waste got there. Probably left over. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 01:19, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crop the image so there's no space on the outsides. 02:19, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. o.o <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 02:25, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink the same color as the scars. Awesome! 04:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. :3 <span style="">08:28 Sun Dec 4

Re-uploaded. Oh, the OA was Icestorm. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 18:41, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

...lol *is contradictory* lighten the shading a bit? XD <span style="">02:27 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. `<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 02:31, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing (W) - Tweaked
Woo, original artist was Sandy and the shading needed to be tweaked. 04:56, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Pretty! 05:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Spur of the moment decision. Blurred and thanks! 06:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit. Theese eese bootifulll.... <span style="">08:29 Sun Dec 4

Blur the shading and define the earpink. 22:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (WC) (E) ~ Redone
I just realized I named the file wrong so it didn't reupload. I'll try to fix that. Anyways, OA = Bramble, and it was on the redo list because he needed to be more brownish cream, and the project has a disdain for triangle tabbies. Comments? 16:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes stand out a little more? 16:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a tad bit lighter and blur the rump shading more. This is really neat! 19:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlight on the rump bigger, blur the shading a bit more and lighten it. 21:55, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, please stop repeating what other people said. <span style="">22:28 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded. These stripes are so failish... 06:00, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Grrr. Trollsky smash wife. xD Perhaps make the earpink slightly bigger and blur? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 18:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I liek deh stripes. Could you make the colour a bit... warmer? *doesn't know how to explain* it's kinda dull right now. <span style="">02:30 Tue Dec 6

Poppyfrost (Ki) - Tweaked
Original Artist was Maplefern; patches needed to be dappled. Comments? Elorisa  17:14, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the patches less smudged and make the dapples more like the ones on her other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:10, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! So cute! Make <- this ear pink more triangular. Actually, make 'em both. And one is lighter/darker than the other ear-pink. <span style="">22:56 Sun Dec 4

Blur the patches. 23:10, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and it needed to be longhaired. 17:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

define the shading on the white and smudge the stripes along the edges of the patch their in - 20:01, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 20:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Both ears need to be brown, not onl one, if you notice on his warrior 20:28, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, please 21:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow, don't repeat things that have already been said. Smudge the paw on <--- that side a little bit. Darken the shading just a touch. 22:02, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (W) - Redone
OA was Mousetalon. Her image had multiple, multiple issues with it like I said on her MC. Since I'm the OA of her new image, I can just fix the muzzle and get rid of the herbs. I imagine this won't get many comments, if at all, but, comments for improvement? 19:20, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm...maybe blur the patches just a little. 21:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Patches look fine, lovee 'em mentor. Define the earpink a tad. <span style="">22:25 Sun Dec 4

I'll have to change that on her MC too  01:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Honeyfern (Ki) ~ Redone
I had to re-do this one like ten times before I thought it was alright. xD So sad that I didn't get to do Lilykit or Seedkit... .3. 19:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Baww, she looks like a little pot of honey! But on her warrior image the stripes are a bit farther apart. 20:15, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! ^-^ How is this? 02:04, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's lovely. Great job. Darken the shading a bit? <span style="">02:34 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded Thank you, Wildheart. Darkened the shading. 02:55, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fawnstep - Tweaked
Whew, one spot left! Shading needed darkening, OA= Hiddensun, and Rainwhisper added white paws after that. - 20:24, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list for this, but the eyes are very neon. Can you lighten or darken them to a more natural color? 20:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

And make the herbs a more natural colour also. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

A more natural color on the eyes and herbs, and the paws look a bit gray. 21:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwillow: Please refrain from repeating comments that have already been said. 22:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

And the paws are fine, it's just shading. <span style="">22:20 Sun Dec 4

Could you fix the shading on the paws? it's bothering me. It looks like there's parts of it that are lighter then it should be for shading. I'm not sure how you'd go about doing that though... Maybe add another layer and try and balance it out... 19:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think the paws look fine, honestly :3 but could you fix the one really bright white pixel near where the chest meets the legs? <span style="">02:36 Tue Dec 6

Toadfoot (W) - Tweaked
I get him confused with Toadstep >_>. Original artist was Sandstar, and the shading was blotchy. Comments? 00:41, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

He looks kinda red, make him more brown and darken the shading on the back on the front leg - 02:07, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pupil. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The eye style is the artist's choice Maple. Lighten the whole thing just a bit, it's a bit hard to see. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:47, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded GIMP is garbage. (I hope I didn't offend anyone who uses it. :P) 21:16, December 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Is offended* xD Mebbe brighten the earpink a weenie bit and blur it. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 22:27, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:38, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

* Is also offended* How darest thou! (I have no idea.) Anyway, lighten the shading a little. 23:52, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I also lightened the pelt colour a tad. 00:28, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

* is offended too* Lighten the pelt more, it looks almost black on my screen, and my monitor is pretty bright. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:20, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:25, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (D) - Redone
Got permission from Scarlet to redo all his images. Though there's nothing wrong with any of them on their own, none of them match eachother, so I'm gonna redo all of them to match. I think this looks similar enough to the kit one that that doesn't need to be redone though. I want to do all of them, so I'd prefer if nobody took them, but I won't throw a fit if someone does. OA was Sandstar. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:48, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Redden the earpink and define the tail shading (if there is any). 23:09, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Snaketail (E) - Tweaked
Can someone help me get rid of the waste? :3. It's tweaked, honest xD. Orginal artist was Ashshadow' Neede shading blurred and gray flecks on chin. Elorisa  01:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll hlp you get rid of the waste. One moment please. 01:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some white parts on the tail, and can you blur the shading a bit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There ya go Elo =3 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there, *Was requested to get rid of re-appearing waste* One seccond, then,. ^^ . 02:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks really blurred to me; fix that? <span style="">02:37 Tue Dec 6

But the lineart isn't blurred; I checked xD. Before I reuploaded. -- Elorisa   13:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It sure looks blurred though.... And there's still empty white specks on the tail and back ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:12, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Barley (Ro) - Redone
OA was Sandy, and there was a lot of things wrong with him, including blurred lineart, little to no actual shading that needed blurring, blotchy shading, etc., etc. 02:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

His eye is in shadow and needs depth, and I feel there should be another light spot on his face, blend the tail shading out more. 18:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:32, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. 23:45, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Too dark? 23:50, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect! Make the ear-pink a tad smaller please. <span style="">01:11 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. 01:14, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (W) - Redone
OA was Maplefern, with tweaks by Cloudskye and a redo by Icestorm. He needed his tawny head removed as that was a mistake and his stripes/mottles redone. I made him ginger with brown patches, as that is how I interpreted his description. I'm so happy I finally got a complicated charart. XD Comments? 07:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Brighten the haunch highlight. 20:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a tad. :3 21:41, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden it as well. 23:44, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. <span style="">01:14 Tue Dec 6

Rowanstar (L) - Tweaked
(uh now see waste! *running to fix it*) Yes, I made him more brown, black looked like dark green, i edited it as well and I edited shadings, OA is Bramble and (?) tweaked by Iceheart? (there is edited ear-pink) ,15:04,December 5,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs please :3 23:43, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste under his front foot. 00:47, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more. 01:22, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Q)- Tweaked
Needed a torn ear to match the warrior. `<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes

Do you think you could make it pointy? <span style="">01:17 Tue Dec 6

That's how the normal ear goes though...unless you mean the bit on the inside. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 01:21, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefur (W. Alt) ~ Redone
Ahahaha, I'm sure you all remember this one. Well, I re-did it. Considering the color was a bit off. I matched the warrior's colors, not the elder's, since the elder needs to be tweaked for highlights being waaaaay too bright. 16:32, December 6, 2011 (UTC)