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Snowdrop (Kittypet) - For Approval
i like to shade white cats Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 20:35, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Very pretty! :D Can you define the light on ---> ear? 20:40, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:45, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

add shading depth?

Still working? 23:36, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, I'm gonna re-up tonight <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups an attempt was made <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Where is your light source? <span style="">1:37 Mon Mar 4 2019

Looks like its coming from --> side Malina457 (talk) 02:04, March 5, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Can you define the light on the legs 17:01, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:21, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I have this ready I've just forgotten to re-up it my focus has gone to trying to get waspwhisker white right aaah I'll re-up it when I'm on my pc <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:01, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reups + shading fixes so <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:48, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth th3 shading some? 00:15, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think it looks pretty smooth....maybe just a tiny bit more. Could you define the light on the collar? 19:22, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

I honestly think the shading's smooth enough and doesn't need to be tweaked at all.

define the shading depth <span style="">12:05, 3/14/2019

Still working?

I already tried defining the depth earlier and honestly this was the best I could do, and it seems fine to me. Sorry if I sound rude here but I would just like one more opinion and if it's agreeing, then I'll try. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:21, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think it looks okay 12:42, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

I thought she had green eyes... -- John made it. He’s the only one. Rest of us… no.  But… I tried. In the end. I did.  22:47, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

She should, yeah. 00:46, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Myler (KP) ~ CBA
Based him off my own pretty kitty :) and Spooky told me to add a bowtie so I hope that worked out 00:46, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading and define it on the white please 06:58, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The paw pads are also multicolored, when they should be just one. 15:05, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Not necessarily, paw pads are artists choice Malina457 (talk) 15:35, March 2, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded Think I fixed shading, and BTW I based the pawpads off my kitty :) 04:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading slightly on the collar? 04:31, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading on the flank a bit.

01:23, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah, sorry, I've been busy all week and haven't had time to get on the computer. After my band assessment today I should have time. Wish me luck! 17:36, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Straight superiors! Also, I'm sorry, I can never see what I'm doing with black cats 04:12, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading on the leg nearest to the belly? the shading looks super rough. great job! ^^

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07:47, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded better-ish...? I couldn't really make the shading there cooperate 18:13, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading? it looks dark (its noticeable bc of the shading on the white) 10:49, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I should've known using black shading on white would come back to bite me 21:12, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

with your lightsource the entire stomach would be in shading <span style="">12:06, 3/14/2019

So the whole stomach should be Gray? 20:33, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, it should be in shading. Try taking cues from Fidgetflake's kp for reference, since it also has white on the stomach. ^^ 22:55, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Too much...? 01:23, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Elder blanks - For Approval
aaa ty all so much!!!! Whiskii ✿ 02:49, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe that the heads are just very slightly too big (from reference images, it seems like a cats body is around 2 (2/3) heads) 03:02, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the nose bridge a bit - like this. 12:22, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. with the way the <-- whiskera are pointed would the --> left ones show? I adore these 12:30, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Might be my personal problem but could you make the smile a little less connected to the whiskers/less...noticeable? I love a smile and a small one is cute but this one seems overly large for a cat. Idk. These are really good though! 19:39, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with what winter said about the smile– i also think it would be more in character if it were lessened 03:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hows this look? blanks are hard!! Whiskii ✿

hm, it still looks as though the whiskers/mouth are touching maybe curve the mouth down a tad instead of up? 15:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Are changes showing?

last nitpick– the long hair tail's seems to lie unnaturally flat, could you maybe add more fur lines there? i love these so much 15:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is optional; but maybe since they are elders add little lines under their eyes to make them seem older?

15:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mind checking for a few darker gray lineart pixels that aren't quite black? There's a few scattered around on it

i think wiki's having a problem rn or somethin because the changes arent showing, ill get to theother comments in a sec  Whiskii  ✿ 16:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded are the changes finally showing? also i tried putting a line under their eyes but it blended too much with the whiskers. i may still add it if you really want to  Whiskii  ✿ 17:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the blanks could benefit from a line under the eyes - just to make them look older. 18:07, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I also just wanted to point out the longhair's tail is like that because its supposed to be flat on the ground ^-^  Whiskii  ✿ 18:40, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I mean they look fine without the line imo 20:27, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed; the line might make it too crowded. 22:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tried something out, thoughts? Whiskii ✿ 22:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I think these look great! 02:25, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Personally I think the lines around the eyes (both on the left side and near the snout) should be removed. Cats don't really have any sort of creasing in those two spots no matter what age, so it doesn't make much sense for them to be there. The shoulders are also too defined, especially on the longhair, and the tail curve is a bit unnatural right now. Also, I don't have the time to draw a test lineart tweak to check, but have you made sure that the haunch area looks good when the tail is removed? Cause that was a slight problem on the old versions, and even on the kit blanks I had to completely redo the haunch after I realized it looked weird when they were used for a short-tailed/tailless character. If you've already checked and made sure it looks fine like that, you can ignore this bit of the comment.

reuploaded removed the eye lines, made the shorthair's tail better, kept the longhair's tail as is, because i cant really do much else with it, removed most of the shoulder line. also the haunch area looks fine when tail is removed, you just have to draw it in correctly  Whiskii  ✿

changes arent showing on the shorthair :(  Whiskii  ✿

reuploaded there was waste around the image? o.O also i think its working now! changes are showing! Whiskii ✿ 15:09, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

now the changes for the waste arent showing -.-  Whiskii  ✿ 15:10, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hopefully this fixes it  Whiskii  ✿ 23:13, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure but on the shorthair, I think the ears need to be brought forward so the neck curves naturally into the head - something like this?  16:13, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

I looked at some images of cats in this position and their backs appear more arched and their shoulders are not really visible;, , as a reference. Could you also make the body longer? They look a bit short right now. 20:17, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna give a redline on this when I get some more free time later, but I did wanna point out that it's not clear if this pose is supposed to be the kind of bunched up pose that patch linked, or a more relaxed pancake-y pose like this. Either way the spine is two short right now, but whether you lengthen the entire body a lot and keep the arch roughly the same or lengthen it just a bit and make the arch much more pronounced, that's kinda up to your interpretation of the pose (though yes, please do remove the shoulder lines, they're not visible in either case).

reuploaded i think the wiki is being weird again! sorry for lack of uploads my life has been super busy lately! Whiskii ✿ 20:57, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, the wiki's being really weird lately. So could you provide a link for the changes? Unfortunately, I can't see them. c: 16:08, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the changes on my screen :P here's a screenshot <span style="">16:10, 3/13/2019

Thank you! I still believe that the ears on the shorthair need to be brought forward so the neck curves naturally into the head -  like this?  18:27, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

I'd really rather not, i already moved the ears forward  Whiskii  ✿ 19:24, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think they could be moved forward, just like 3 pixels or so? <span style="l">19:42, 03/13/2019

Also, on the shorthair, could you make it so the back is flatter, it seems to dip down a tad far. 18:41, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Henry (KP) ~ For Approval
Oh well, I know he isn't listed on the charat list, but we have a name, and we have a description, so why wouldn't he get a design? And also since we can make tabbies whatever color that we want I made him sort of bracken colored! Axolotls are my children!  03:30, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

didn't david claim this already? --

04:11, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yep, it's David's claim. 04:12, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad! It isn't on the reservation table so I didn't know :P  Axolotls are my children!  05:00, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yeah, their the OA so they'd get first claim. It's all good though. 05:06, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

you can keep it man. I don't think I really want it anyway 11:52, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Guess this will keep going, define light on back legs. --

14:31, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is probably personal preference but can you make the stripes a little less curly? 18:28, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups! Any better? Axolotls are my children!  22:31, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

The light is great on the back legs! define the shading a lil more on the paw nearest to the tongue? this is pretty ^^ --

02:10, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

hmm this is going to be controversial, but I don't think this looks like a tabby because of all the identical swirls. Maybe add more variation and some straight stripes?

Reups Those stripes were difficult, but I hope you like it! I kept everything the same but the stripes layer :)  Axolotls are my children!  15:28, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. could you thicken them just a tiny bit? This is really good ^-^ 23:05, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

That's artist's choice. <span style="">1:53 Thu Mar 14 2019

shading is leaking a little by the back part of the tummy and the leg underneath it <span style="">12:07, 3/14/2019

Dark-colored StarClan cat (Star) ~ CBA
Well that's a lot of typing in the heading... I apologize now if this is named incorrectly 04:45, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Not bad! Blur the pale chest into the fur a bit more, as well as smudging the fur into the earpink (thought it is your preference). 04:48, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

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Could you possibly darken the gray a bit to be a darker gray as with the light it doesn't seem like a dark color cat. 05:09, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a touch. I would reccomend 2-3 clicks with the burn tool and that should do the trick. 15:53, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Kitty 18:23, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, there needn't be any shading on the back^^

Define the eye depth. 19:18, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

This cat is from Crookedstar's Promise (I think), so it would have to be SE-6, not 4.-- 16:39, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Potato, as I've just said before, please don't comment just to mention a file name. It can be taken care of once the image is approved. Right now, as long as it follows a basic naming guideline, it's perfectly acceptable and one of the staff can take care of it later.

Reuploaded Redid shading. It's just easier. Which probably now means there are a bunch of other problems to fix but c'est la vie 21:51, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Found the file, File:SE-4.star.png. Next time keep a consistent file name ^^ Could you smooth the shading more? -- 07:14, 3/14/2019 07:14, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading is smooth enough tbh. but could you define the light on the tail? also theres some leaking shading at the bottom of the chest <span style="">12:07, 3/14/2019

the chest is leaking to the shoulder a bit? -- 00:46, 3/15/2019

Reuploaded Sorry, Potato mentioned the name should be changed so I changed it and then I was just like "wait a minute but another CP cat said 4" so I changed it back and forgot to add the "-2"... Anyways, this any better...? 01:28, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Black-and-White Kittypet (KP) - CBA
Something weird is going on with uploads and wikia....my image is here but it doesn’t show up like that on the file uploads. It still has potato's image shown??? Anyways Jayce I hope you explode over this (in a good way) 19:19, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you perhaps lighten the shading a tiny bit in the ear? I LOVE THIS.

Reuploaded I lightened it on the white parts too. Now I’m happy with the shading 01:35, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading the on the white some and smooth the shading overall 01:48, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:00, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Pale Minor She-cat - For Approval
My first attempt at a charart on here, so I hope I've done it right! 03:37, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome job! Define the shading/add more all over. If you can, define the earpink a little bit. 03:46, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the tail shading and define the eye color? It just seems white to me. 04:10, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Unfortunately, the wiki seems to dull all the colouration, and I can't quite figure out how to fix that. 04:29, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

While the shading is gorgeous, where is your lightsource coming from? I'm thinking from above, but some areas are lacking shading that would otherwise confirm this (I'm upgrading you to an apprentice btw keep up the good work :D ) 20:01, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pink is still hard to tell what color it is, would you mind darkening it by a few shades? 22:04, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redefined the shading to match the more general shading idea of the blank while still keeping the additions for body definition, and tried to darken up the ear pink as much as possible. 07:43, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Also when you re-upload, try doing it under the same name so there isn't so many ^-^ but heres a redline. The red is basically where the general shading should be, the blue is the light, and the purple was where I beleived the shading should be smooth. 03:40, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't quite how I imagine the light source, as I imagine a sun setting toward the 'camera', but definitely will take that into mind! I was having to use new images as unfortunately the changes wouldn't show unless I did. I can try and just replace the images instead? 04:54, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

I was primarily going off what I saw. Currently, you could try uploading it under tge same one and using imgur for the changes. 05:20, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading more? disregard if this has been said after your previous upload <span style="">12:09, 3/14/2019

Large tabby with sharp claws (Q) ~ For Approval
welp, here's me a torbie, I'll fix the light on that foreleg and the elbow shading soon 00:25, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, okay light for that leg and the shading on the elbow is fixed. 20:09, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

changes figured I'd add this since wikia is being stubborn 23:03, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading everywhere but the face? <span style="">12:11, 3/14/2019

I actually think the facial shading could be defined a bit.

Talon (Alt CG) ~ For Approval
uh wiki is being so annoying and not uploading my changes >:( so here boop --

11:43, 3/13/2019

According to the official image the white needs to go down further. Also, the stripes need to be less visible.

is this just my screen but i see the old blankWillowstep21 (talk) 13:57, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

@Willow, wikia is not showing changes to images recently, which is why it appears to be the old image. Silver already mentioned the problem and linked to the new image. 14:46, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Dang wiki! Its so cute! but only the link shows it. anyways, is it just me, or is the earpink to orange? Axolotls are my children!  15:31, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some shading to the belly and behind the front leg? <span style="">1:48 Thu Mar 14 2019

The earpink is alright? I could desaturate it, but all around it's fine --

06:48, 3/14/2019 06:48, March 14, 2019 (UTC) Reups changes --

07:05, 3/14/2019 07:05, March 14, 2019 (UTC) Okay wiki is kind of working, probably wouldn't upload my changes later --

07:09, 3/14/2019 07:09, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading some more. also the white should extend down the chest not onto the shoulder <span style="">12:12, 3/14/2019

ok i see the image properly now Willowstep21 (talk) 12:27, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

@ Willow please don't comment about things not related to critiques. It clots up, thank you ^^ --

12:50, 3/14/2019 12:50, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --

13:03, 3/14/2019 13:03, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

On the official image, there is more white on his face such as around the eyes. Could you please add that? 18:29, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Also, I think his official image has more stripes on his tail? 18:33, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reups That is correct. --

00:44, 3/15/2019

There should be head stripes, and the stripes on the body still look too prominent and don't match the official image.

There are head stripes, the mud is just covering it. --

13:50, 3/15/2019

Reups Is this better? --

14:18, 3/15/2019

This is pretty!! Maybe smudge the edges of the white fur a bit more? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  00:34, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups -- 04:40, 3/17/2019

Darktail (Alt L) - For Approval
Hand drawn shading. Its not texture, just shading. I finally found a shading style I like. <span style="">01:06 Thu Mar 14

can you upload a screenshot of your new image? <span style="">12:15, 3/14/2019

ughh i see the old image Willowstep21 (talk) 12:39, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

https://vvcap.com/xJasxqeZA It shows up fine on my computer. Ugh wikia why are you so dumb? <span style="">15:03 Thu Mar 14

Smooth the shading? <span style="">16:40, 3/14/2019

Define just a little bit of shading depth maybe, if possible? 23:34 Thu Mar 14 2019

this is SO good! Is the ear pink outside of where it should be? Axolotls are my children!  01:35, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Talking about ear pink, the > earpink isn't filled in all the way. --

04:29, 3/15/2019

yeah... did you like... do something to the ear pink layer? it just looks... overall... like it got messed up somehow. the shading on it on the <-- side needs to be smoothened out. Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  15:31, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Snowdapple already mentioned about smoothing, just to let you know. -- 16:37, 3/15/2019

I may not get this re-uploaded till Monday just a heads up. I am driving tomorrow and was at a job fair all day and still need to do errands. <span style="">18:52 Sat Mar 16

Reuploaded changes I smoothed it as much as I can without making it look muddled. I can try defining the depth more if the blurring didn't help. <span style="">18:06 Sun Mar 17

Snowstar (Le) ~ For Approval
here is a son, I tried to match the StarClan as best as I could 03:25, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

define shading on the face? <span style="">12:15, 3/14/2019

Think there's some leaking shading on the front limbs and belly shading. 18:32, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the StarClan image is a tad bit lighter than what you have here. Not a lot, but maybe a couple of shades. ​​​​

I colored picked from the star, although it was hars with the highlights and shading covering most of it. I'll try and it some though. 21:29, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe try using highlights to match the image in brightness, it might help a little? 23:33 Thu Mar 14 2019

is it just me, or dose it look like the earpink is on the ear, out of where the earpink should be? Axolotls are my children!  01:33, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Earpink is fine. -- 08:36, 3/15/2019

The circle created by the tail should not be filled in. 18:38, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

it does look like there is a tiny bit of earpink waste on our left side's cheek above the eye. <span style="">19:03 Fri Mar 15

That's shading, I used red. Its the same as my other leader images. 20:39, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna be the unpopular one here, but the tint really throws the color off and makes it seem like it doesn't match the StarClan image. Also, not sure what you do or don't plan on doing, but Max's suggestion of using highlights might work out for matching the color better.

Sasha (Alt KP) - For Approval
i think since the bluestar was removed im ok to do this? 23:29, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading just a smidge, possibly? The depth is fine, but that's all I can really see right now - also this should be named File:Sasha.kittypet.alt.png :D) 23:42 Thu Mar 14 2019

Oof sorry! Re-Uploaded! 21:01, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

do you mind smudging the ends where the toes meet the dark brown socks? it just looks too defined <span style="">09:48, 3/16/2019

Re-Uploaded! 14:09, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Ragged tabby tom (DF) ~ CBA
I'm just gonna turn all of my tabby OCs into demon kitties don't mind me 05:41, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe lighten up the shading a bit?  -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  00:37, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 01:25, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 00:50, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Velvet (SD) (KP)~ For Approval
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06:29, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading along the tail? 18:36, March 15, 2019 (UTC)

could you add a bit of depth to the neck shading? <span style="">19:02 Fri Mar 15

with your lightsource the entire tummy needs to be in shading. also can you smooth the shading on the flank & legs some? <span style="">09:50, 3/16/2019

Withdrawing just... no. anyone can take over. --

02:39, 3/17/2019

i can take over! <span style="">03:44 Sun Mar 17

reuploaded! i'll add depth to the shading tomorrow, tired <span style="">04:29 Sun Mar 17

SD Mid-colored kittypet (KP) - For Approval
I hate solids <span style="">16:59, 03/15/2019

smooth shading a tad more on the tail? <span style="">09:49, 3/16/2019

Dark Forest tabby ~ For Approval
14:31, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe put a little bit more shading on the tail? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  15:19, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:28, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add some more shading to the chest? I don’t think it would be that visible with this light source. 18:00, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Four white StarClan cats (Star) - For Approval
I hope I named this correctly. 18:58, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

Just thought I'd add that the book they are from is Tallstar's Revenge, I believe? 18:59, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the earpink a bit? 19:54, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

smoothen out the face shading? and I cant see any color in the eyes. Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  21:00, March 16, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I decided to smooth the shading all over. I've also smudged the ear pink. The eyes are meant to be blue - almost white - but I did try and add a little more colour to them. 09:47, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Shnuky (KP) ~ For Approval
she's back

Maybe you could darken the shading color just a tiny bit? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  00:45, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Fog (L) ~ For approval
00:40, March 17, 2019 (UTC)

Patch (RF) (KP) - For Approval
Since the entire set is getting remade, I switched the pattern. If I need to do it in the original one, let me know. All the colors are the same, though. <span style="">17:46 Sun Mar 17