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Whiteclaw (Star) - For Approval
My first StarClan charart. Comments? Brick 20:18, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Edity-boop. Showing a version by another member, the pic I made is here http://i59.tinypic.com/25070yc.png Brick  20:19, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, fixed some issue I had with lighting on the face. Link is http://i60.tinypic.com/350kto4.png Brick  06:48, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Whiten the paw some - it's looking gray. 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, hope this is better! http://i62.tinypic.com/110xaiu.png Brick  21:06, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink some - it looks a bit too bright. Also, try using pure white for that paw - maybe it'll make it look whiter. 00:10, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I accidently uploaded an old file instead of the newer version, fixed version issss here --> http://i57.tinypic.com/w1xt9j.png Brick  13:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, especially on the white paw. 17:02 Sun Jun 8

Re-ups, linky is http://i62.tinypic.com/16kysk.png. is it just me or does he look a bit like a plastic toy with his expression and overall look? Brick  16:55, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, especially on the white paw.

Try darkening his base coat, too - he doesn't seem black. 14:12, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I tried my best ;-; http://i59.tinypic.com/fymop.png  Brick   12:59, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Since he's a primarily black cat, his nose needs to be black. 19:02, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading/highlights.

Still working?

Re-ups, sorry for the late upload, I had some school issues, detention and a ton of homework. http://i57.tinypic.com/28r0h9s.png Brick   08:32, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the highlights a bit more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:11, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Cinderfur (Star) - For Evaluation


Hey so I saw that Cinderfur was on the list for characters needing art, and I'm all like WOO I LOVE THIS GUY. So, here you go. shading i'm so sorry    20:42, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 20:44, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Erm... this isn't the file I uploaded. Wikia, what the heck?!?! 20:45, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the thumbnail of the one you uploaded on the recent photos bar. Define the eye depth and chest shading. Brick 20:50, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups (hopefully Dang it Wikia!)  uggg shading me no likey 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

If it still isn't showing for you (as it seems to be doing for me), I'd reccomend uploading it to an image sharing site like tinypic or Photobucket. Brick 16:45, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Do not use photobucket. That stores the images in albums and things like that. Tinypic is good, and I also think ezimba is a good one.

Still working? 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

I'd like to be, but I've got finals. I'll try to have the chnges uploaded in the next 2-4 days. I get out of school early on Wednesday and Thursday, so I'll have time then, if that's okay? 21:38, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

/ Reups! 18:08, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart.

/ Reups 00:27, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading and blur it some more. 0:41 Sat Jun 14

Re-Ups. If changes aren't /showing 17:16, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading in the area between the shoulder and the haunch. 14:12, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-UP. Changes here 21:06, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shading still leaks away from the lineart.

How do I fix that? Also, how do I prevent it from happening? I keep being told to smooth out the shading, but... then that happens. Also, can you point out where it is? I can see it along his belly... 00:52, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Add some more depth to the shading. It seems quite flat. 17:34 Wed Jun 18

Re up. Changes here if need be. 15:36, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out, especially the defined bits. Brick  14:35, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 1 that's about as much as I can smooth it without it leaking again. 15:20, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 21:30, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

I will if someone can tell me how to fix the shading leak problem. 23:08, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Basically, what I do is blur my shading enough so that the transition looks soft. For leaking, I blur those areas too, but not nearly as much as the others, so it's not too blotchy but not too leaky. 17:41, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-/ Up! Thanks, Beebs. Other than the shading (which looks really dark on this computer) is there anything else that needs to be tweaked? Quite frankly, I'm not even sure why this is in the list, .Gingers looked good, but I'm not complaining. 21:04, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

The link does not work - try another way. Also, it's on the list because it needs to be approved =P 13:34, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Fixed the link 15:33, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Any comments? 15:47, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Re-/Ups 17:08, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (Kit) - For Approval
First charart since joining again. Comments? 21:19 Fri Jun 6

I'm sorry but since you reserved after posting this, it may have to be declined... I may be wrong, though, so don't shoot me if I am. 21:30, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

-Shrug- Oh well. My chararts aren't good anyway ;~; 21:31 Fri Jun 6

Nah, it was only a couple minutes, as seen here, and sometimes it takes that long to post an edit somewhere. I think Cloud should be allowed to keep the image. I'd have no complaints. Some people forget the dates at first too and we let them slide.

Okie, just had to check~ ask Berry for the file of one of the other images, I believe Berry did those ones, so that you can get the colours precise; it looks a little lighter than the warrior, but it could just be my kindle. Define your shading and texture too. Don't you say that your chararts aren't good, Whisker; honestly, this is great, for your first in a long time! 21:49, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

I asked her, now I have to wait xD thanks sorrel   22:01 Fri Jun 6

Re-up. Shading is a bit better, I think. Also defined texture. 22:24 Fri Jun 6

Define the texture a bit more? 21:37, 06/7/2014

Re-up. Also defined texture on patches. 23:01 Sat Jun 7

Sharpen and thin out the shading a lot. 20:26, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I oculdn't really sharpen it, but re-upload anyway~ 23:32 Sun Jun 8

Define the shading; it appears a bit flat.

Re-up 22:06 Thu Jun 12

Try darkening and defining the brown patches. Look at the warrior and rogue for reference. Try smudging them with a size one brush - but not too much, though! 14:13, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the gray a touch and define, not darken, the shading. 18:13, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up 22:13 Sun Jun 15

Runningnose (D) - For Approval
i'll just leave this here 00:30, 06/7/2014

He needs a gray muzzle. 00:34, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

reup 02:29, 06/7/2014

Add light to the far hind foot bc that wouldn't totally be in shadow unless he's super awkward at sitting. Thicken the rump shading a little more, and add a bit more towards the center of his haunch because cats are skinny and the bones would protrude a little more on an older cat. 20:24, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:39, 06/13/2014

The color on the muzzle is leaking towards part of the herb bundle. <span style="">00:30 Sat Jun 14

I thought it was doing that as well, but it's not. The herb layer is above everything else, so it can't be leaked into. Also, I found some waste, I will reupload momentarily. <span style="">00:36, 06/14/2014

Reuploaded. I also played around with the thickness of the shading on the haunch. If it's too thin, I'll thicken it again, but it looks better to me now ^;;; <span style="">13:20, 06/14/2014

CBA? 18:31, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

So sorry, but can you define the shading on the face and on the tail and his back left leg? 21:06, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

I think it's fine tbh. <span style="">12:51, 06/23/2014

I agree with Ferk. Very nice job! 15:49, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but I agree with Duck. =/

Blackclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
-That was annoying to make. But whatever! I probably missed something. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:50, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Make his nose black. If you look at black cats in real life, almost all of them have black noses. Also, add a little more depth to the eyes. Great charart :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:46, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, in this case, the nose has to match the color of the other images nose colors, which I'm fairly certain it does. 02:55, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

His nose is black on his kit and apprentice.

Yeah okay, so sorry 'bout that. Guess I'm more color blind than thought. 03:00, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks for the compliment, Breeze. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:54, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Here's the colors just in case you couldn't get them right because of my shading. The smokey things are at about 25% opacity, and I used a flecked brush to smudge/place them on the charart. If you want one of the files for direct colors, opacity levels, ect, go ahead and say so and I can fire them your way. =) I shade weirdly lmao

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thank you! <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 22:07, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 16:08, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:45, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge/and or blur (whichever you want to use) the light patches around his eyes a tiny bit. this looks amazing~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:15, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:17, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on his forelegs. 18:55, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 18:43, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I found some waste. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:17, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''More waste. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:16, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

This is just a tip, but if you go to your lineart layer and use the want tool to select outside of your lineart then ayou can click all of your other layers and simply press delete to remove waste. c: 13:57, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the chest. Its barely visible, either that or its my screen.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:12, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine and roughly the same color as the other images. I can see it just fine, and it's smudged enough. Link to edited comment so the original comment I replied to can be seen.

Re-uploaded. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 07:20, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Star) ~ For Approval
Yay. :3 Comments?

Define/darken the shading, and could you smudge it so that it flows with the fur? Those are some really amazing eyes. <span style="">16:39 Thu Jun 12

Smudging the shading isn't mandatory. =/ Idk what everyone's thing is with smudging but not everyone does it

No, that's not it. I can clearly see that the shading is smudged, so I'm only suggesting that it be smudged in the way of the fur. ;) <span style="">18:07 Thu Jun 12

Add the texture. It's a bit faint, but it is there. 19:12, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay then. It doesn't look smudged to me but whatever. o.O

Re-up ~ I thought nobody would see I smudged the shading a little bit, but oh well. XD I'm not really good at smudging shading so I added a very thin layer of highlight and smudged that, but it's hard to see on a black cat. And Bbun, what do you mean with texture? Sorry, I'm from the Netherlands so my English may not be really good. ^_^"

As in, the dark black "stripes" on his rogue. Those are texture. Please add it ^^;;. 18:16, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Hope I got what you meant. :3

Darken and define the texture. I can barely see it. 14:10, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ I tried, but I don't know if it's better now. :/

Darken the opacity on the texture - it should be slightly darker than the base coat. 18:56, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Tried again. I also added a little bit more highlight. I don't know if I do it good 'cause I never worked with texture on cats before.

Define the texture on the face, chest, and legs. 17:39, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Sorry that I'm often a bit late with it. ^^'

If he's a black cat he should have a black nose, unless his other chararts are like that. 17:14, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Made his nose black.

Mossheart (Star) ~ For Approval
Withdrew from Hawkheart's StarClan image to do this one. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:13, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Shapen the patches some. 20:46, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:57, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the black a bit. 23:37, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, since i colorpicked from her Medicine cat image, but if someone else agrees i will.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:29, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

I gotta agree with Duck on that note^

Re-up.  Thats as dark as i can make it without it not matching her other image. =/~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:06, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 18:56, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:26, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

can you sharpen the brown a little, its a bit sharper on her mc image 10:43, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

withdrawing to work on something else.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 07:07, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Taking over. Turned out alright, I think. c: Comments? <span style="">03:38, 06/22/2014

I can't really see the earpink in the ear closest to us, maybe remove a bit of shading? Those eyes are stunning. 10:29, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad bit, I'm having trouble picking it out. 13:55, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Sorrel. <span style="">23:22, 06/22/2014

Blur the shading a bit? It looks hard-edged--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:13, June 23, 2014 (UTC).

Boulder (Ki) - For Approval
23:36, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:21, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:37, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded darkened the stripes and played with the shading, I think it matches better now (and besides that I like it better now) 21:07, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the neck shading.

Re-uploaded 21:19, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on his legs,~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:13, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, I can see the light fine. c: 03:34, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

At the very least define the light on the <<< leg, as well as define the tail shading. 22:53, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded 22:59, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
tfw u almost like your charart 00:04, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the head and tail shading a bit. Maybe this'll finally get approved after two other people trying to do it

re-uploaded i hate tail shading on these blanks 00:09, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Is the neck shading throughout the entire neck area, or just on -> side? I kinda can't tell and you know the source for this image better than I do.

?? its attached to the head shading so its coming from the right 04:49, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

defien the leg shafing a tiny bit  23:17, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 23:44, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Cloudberry (Q) ~ For Approval
I've always loved her name. Comments? 18:32, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and define it on the head and chest.

Define the shading on her front legs.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:33, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 13:26, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading.

Reups 15:19, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front legs? Leafstrike Talk  17:39, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad? it looks really dark.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:14, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Shading darkness is artist's choice. 06:57, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Shading darkness is only artist's choice, but there can be shading that is too dark. We've been through this before, and people are starting to really abuse the "choice" thing. The shading does seem dark in some places. Also, give some shape to the facial shading- I think it would curve a bit more following the shape of the face, wouldn't it?

Cloud (Storm) (KM)~ For Approval
hm i dont think ive done mud on a cat before 10:37, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, would you mind removing just a bit of the mud? 13:24, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think the amount of mud is fine. This is incredible! <span style="">17:09 Thu Jun 19

yeah i think its ok, i mean theyre rolling around in it so its bound to go everywhere thanks man 23:33, June 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit?

re-uploaded 23:46, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Voletooth (Star) - For Approval
Not totally happy with this yet, but I can edit it more later. Suggestions? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:09, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reuploaded. Shading has been darkened and defined, and I also added a bit of highlight. I'm much happier with this now, though I'm not entirely certain about the stripes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:02, June 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the chest shading, if there is some.

Reuploaded. Chest shading defined, as well as the back shading 'cause it was bugging me. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:40, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

His stripes look thinner on his other images... Maybe thin them out some? Also, define the shading on the paws and tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:03, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I thinned out the stripes a bit, and defined the shading on the paws and tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:19, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on his face, and smudge the ear pink into the fur a tiny bit more.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:39, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:16, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

remove some of the criss-crossing stripes on his back, to match the elder which would be most of what you can see here. c: Beautiful work, I love your chararts~ 23:13, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This took forever to edit and get it just right, but I finally got the stripes looking the way I want. And thanks! :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:37, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Tansy (Lo) - For Approval
Wasn't feeling like a texture today lmao

Could you define the shading on the legs? This time I will take them mwahaha <span style="">21:03 Fri Jun 20

Re-uploaded. Why do you keep stealing my eyes?

CBA? 22:51, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry but defien the facial highlight (or light if you don't use highlights) and is there shading on the top of his back? just askin about that. 23:01, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

I think the facial area is fine, and no, there isn't? I shade all my loners like this. o.O

Thunder (Alt. R) - For Approval
- The shading looked a lot better on my laptop…. >.< 01:41, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

If he was described as golden, wouldn't he get stripes? Since I believe just golden by itself is a variation of ginger.... 01:43, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:32, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, and add some depth to it. 03:38, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:52, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back legs and this should be good. 22:51, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Frostfur (Q) - For Approval
- All colors came from her star clan 01:41, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the tail shading. 13:36, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:14, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the highlights on the belly.

Silverflame (Q) - For Approval
Not sure I got the texture totally right. The changes are here, if they're not showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140621C/ezimba19266771982600.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:32, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and sharpen the ginger-y bits. Jesus crust this is great. wow <span style="">14:42 Sat Jun 21

Thanks! :D Reuploaded, the shading has been defined and the ginger parts were sharpened-ish, as much as I could manage. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:02, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140622C/ezimba19266722428800.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 15:03, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth slightly. This is beeeautiful  loud gushing    Brick   08:26, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Aw, thanks! :D I deepened the eyes and changed a bit of the shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:45, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her stomach and front legs. This is amazing--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:16, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you. :D Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:15, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define/sharpen, don't darken, the shading a bit more on her legs if you could. 23:12, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't you already have an image up? unless i'm just being slow and dumb smh sorry ignore me please   00:17, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

This is a redone queen, therefore Jayie is allowed to post this as well.

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:39, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Cody (Q) ~ For Approval
Decided to take a shot at this pattern. Collar is fair game since the queen is the only one that has it. I hope I don't have to put the collar in shadow, since it'll look unrecognizable that way. Comments? 21:10, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Oh, and I'll give Sorrel credit for making the collar lineart, so I used that, with a very minor change. 21:11, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

It's possible to shade the collar and still have it recognizable. I did it twice and it's pretty easy. Could you define the shading in general, since although I can see it, the pattern and overall color kinda makes it hard to tell in certain places where it is, like the belly and legs.

re-up 22:22, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes a bit more round on the ends to better match her kp? 14:00, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 14:13, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge only the edges/sides of the stripes more, not the ends, make the stripes shorter and still more rounded, and add some stripes coming from the other way on her legs and flank, lessen the point on her forehead stripe and connect it with the two smaller stripes on her head. 23:10, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Dude, thing is, her stripes would lengthen because her belly is getting wider, and therefore stretching out the pattern. The two small stripes on the head aren't connected to the big stripe, as seen on the kittpyet, so it wouldn't match. I can't add any stripes on her legs and flank, since again, it won't match =//. I will smudge the sides of the stripes and lessen the forehead stripe, but that's it. 23:14, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 23:19, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Alright, I just have a suggestion. The stripes are curving towards her front end and head; it seems a bit off with how her belly is rounded, if that makes any sense. Maybe make them curved towards her back end, so they follow the curve of her belly a bit better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:23, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Loner) ~ For Approval
Ah i hate shading.. i blurred it on this charart since smudging wasnt looking so great. Withdrew from Mossheart to do this. Colorpicked from his warrior image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:37, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 22:43, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Defined shading and highlights. Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:55, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the belly shading and on the legs furthest from us - there would be places where the shading is darker, and where the shading is lighter. 23:44, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Mothflight (Ki) - CBA
It's been a while since I did one of these, so why not start off simple? Leafstrike Talk  04:38, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more Brick  08:33, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

No, that looks pretty defined to me. I'm not sure, but should there be light on the front legs and tail? I'm not great at light sources. She's really cute, Leaf :D 10:24, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, can you define it a bit? Don't darken it just sharpen the edge a tiny bit. Can you also define the neck shading? Beautiful! Glad you're back! c: 14:02, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  17:01, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Just out of curiosity, do you use pure white, or an offwhite? Regardless of which one you use, this is a wonderful image considering you haven't posted one of these in a very long time. I can seriously find absolutely nothing wrong with this at present and I think she looks amazing. .o.

It's slightly off-white. And thank you! Leafstrike Talk  17:29, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

I can't see anything wrong with this one. Beautiful job, Leafstrike! 17:11, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Stumpytail (Ro) ~ For Approval
I swear this is the last time I'll ever blur shading. <span style="">20:57 Sun Jun 22

Shorten his tail just a bit? aww but it looks bootiful when it's blurred ;w; 21:00, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I'd rather not. If you compare this to his warrior image, it is approximately the same length. If this rogue image was sitting, it would reach the same spot of his back. <span style="">23:24 Sun Jun 22

Can you shorten it a bit? I think the warrior needs to be shortened too tbh because if he's called stumpytail than he's gonna have a tail shorter than this imho. wonderful work, though 23:08, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. <span style="">18:21 Tue Jun 24

Snowbird(Q) - For Approval
love dat name does anyone remember snow bird from dr quinn medicine woman? 18:36, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and blur it a lot.

Define the light source on the face. <span style="">17:52 Wed Jun 25

re-uplaoded 04:05, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Queen) ~ For Approval
She needed a queen image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:03, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Please use File:Ashfoot.queen.png to upload. The image needs to be named as such so it works properly with the charart template. Also try and give a little bit more shape to the facial shading and define the light on the tail.

'''Re-up. '''Sorry Snow. Uploaded it to that file, Shaped the facial shading, also darkened the shading on her legs and added the light on her tail.

If the changes arent showing up, go here: http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Ashfoot.queen.png~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:22, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

If changes aren't showing, ezimba.com is a good site. 15:48, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. Those eyes are amazing. *.* <span style="">17:51 Wed Jun 25

Re-up. Defined light on her legs. Better? Not sure if changes are showing.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:47, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt Q) - For Approval
I remember posting this for approval the first time I did this one holy crap

Mapleshade (Alt Ki.) ~ For Approval
Used Maan's lineart for this one. I know, the stripes are soo light, but they're like that on the rogue =P. Comments? oh boy this will be fun 02:24, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the face, tail, and leg shading. Leafstrike Talk  02:36, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, unless someone disagrees-  this is how I shade all of my kits o.O 02:38, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna slide in here and agree with Leafstrike. What works on one color might not work on another, and I think you should take that into consideration. =P

re-up didn't blur the legs much but blurred the tail and face some more 02:56, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

The white on the tail seems quite gray. No fair I wanted herrr <span style="">17:01 Wed Jun 25

So what am I supposed to do with it? There's shading on it, so of course it's not going to be completely white =P 17:10, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten it up????? I don't think it would hurt anything.

It's part of the body shading, so if I lighten that, then the whole body will light up, making it look flat. Any other suggestions? 17:16, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Try making a new layer for the tail shading? idk You can keep the body shading the way it is and then make a different layer for the tail. <span style="">17:50 Wed Jun 25

re-up uhh im sorry but i'd rather not do that so I just lightened the shading instead. I hope I don't get any complaints that it's too "flat" x.x 17:59, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

define the leg shading 04:03, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Star) ~ For Approval
i'm back baby comments? — <span style="">09:07 Wed Jun 25

the stripes are more in a "v" shaped pattern on the other images 04:04, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Dawncloud (Star) ~ For Approval
ew; look here for changes; colours are from the kit image. 16:01, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Try making the back stripe curve more. As in, the one that runs along her spine. An example of this can be seem on Hawk Swoop's StarClan image. 16:06, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Sorrel, this is honestly an amazing charart. Love those eyes *.* <span style="">17:00 Wed Jun 25

Moonflower (Q) ~ For Approval
No. <span style="">17:48 Wed Jun 25

Define the shading on her front legs.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:52, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">1:17 Thu Jun 26

If I'm not mistaken, her muzzle and paws need to be pale to match the others. 01:38, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

They are pale, it's just that they have shading on them. <span style="">2:42 Thu Jun 26

well, can you define them, it doesn't look like they're pale to me 04:05, June 26, 2014 (UTC)