Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded Ikilledit 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't really match. Also lighten it so you can see the lineart, and add/majorly define the shading. 05:38, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink on the right. (Our right) 01:33 Sun Jul 15

Still working on this? o3o 02:53, 16, 07, 2012

Yes, re-uploaded. o3o 09:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't match. Take the eye and earpink color from her other images, add more mottles, and make them smaller. 00:44, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a leedle bit. 02:34, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks brown with black mottles...make her more black. Skt Omnia vincit amor  02:36, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading a bit more. Unless changes aren't showing. 01:21, 12, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 20:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case the changes aren't showing here he is. 20:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

These stripes don't match the other images in the slightest. I know it's a kit blank and it's harder, but not even the stripe style matches. Would you consider redoing them? 20:59, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the base coat should be much lighter. Breeze whisker  04:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the fur, but I didn't redo the stripes because I think they are pretty similar if another person disagrees then I will try to redo them, but I don't have GIMP and I can't find the xcf file so I would have to redo the entire thing. Sorry, I really don't want to sound rude or anything. 21:23, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, look at this image. It's nowhere close to matching the others. If you don't redo this, someone else will. 02:25, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gotta agree Wild. They really don't look like the others. Breeze whisker  00:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving you my permission to redo this if need be. It needs to match. 04:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I probably need to thicken the stripes. And fix the earpink. 23:01, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes, smudge them a lot more, darken and define the shading. 00:33, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Change the pattern to match the warrior... 00:48, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the shading have a slight reddish/pinkish tint so it looks like the other images? 11:57, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Q) - Redone
Shading made no sense. Last OA was Shelly. Took the shading from Willowpelt and the colors from her apprentice. Comments? 00:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it/define it on her tail just a tad bit? 02:47, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same as the shading on Willowpelt, so I'd rather not.... but how do you blur and define shading? 0.o 06:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it then make it darker. 17:19, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I defined/darkened the shading on him. OA= Bramble, than redone by Rowan. Changes aren't showing yet. >.> Comments? 19:29 Sun Jul 15

Changes are now showing! :) 22:39 Sun Jul 15

Can you make the earpink color match the other image and make it more triangular? 02:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadedo.o The earpink is straight from the other image, but I made it more triangular ;). I can't fix the one on (our) left because it'll erase the pelt colour. 03:10 Mon Jul 16

I still can't see the shading very well. To me, he seems darker on his kit image than his apprentice. Not sure if that's just me being a derp though  04:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, do you want me to try and fix it or are you as onfused as I am now? :P 14:54 Mon Jul 16

Maybe you want to lighten his base coat a couple shades? 15:43, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do that when I get home. :) At the library! Woo! High-speed here :P  15:52 Mon Jul 16

Blossomkit (Ki) - Tweaked
Ew, blotchy shading. Anyways, I just added a layer of shading over it. OA was Sandy, with a tweak by Ice and Leaf-storm. Comments? 19:58, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading right over her left leg. Looks good! Breeze whisker  23:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading over left leg. And thanks. :) 03:07, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her head and chest. 17:18, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (E) ~ Tweaked
Oh god I hate this image x.x I redid the stripes so she could match her other images better, comments? >.< 17:09, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, or lighten the shading in that area. 21:16, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened it a tad, but I rather not change it too much because it matches the other images. 14:03, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is probably just me... but lighten the stripes to match. Also just a preference but you could tint the shading to match a bit more. owo 08:02, 19, 07, 2012

Mothwing (Mca) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to be defined and OA was Shelly. ^^ Comments? 14:20, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripe, that's near her ear closest to us? The other stripes around it are more blurred. 14:58, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:21, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe dull the "highlights" a tiiny bit? owo 08:07, 19, 07, 2012

Cedarpelt (W) - Redone
Issues with the pattern. OA was Leafstrike with a tweak by Ivy. 17:03, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste. And define the mottles a little more? c: 04:46 Thu Jul 19

Re-uploaded. You'll know changes are showing when there's no line off his back... x.x 16:54, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt. L2) ~ Redone
OA was Ivyheart, and needed to be fox red. Plus, those stripes were triangles...yeah, the color isn't sitting right with me. Suggestions? o.o

It doesn't really look that fox red... Can you brighten the base color a bit? 23:21, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Kinda like this? o.o

Less red, more orange, and duller. Fox. 00:35, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

It still doesn't really seem like fox red. Make it more saturated and orange. Owo Unless changes aren't showing... 08:25, 19, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded. It is orange. o.o

Graymist (Q) ~ Redone
Fuuuuuuuu-- why'd you make the one pattern that Photoshop hates, Leggo? :c Anyways, redone for unnatural stripes. Most recent OA was Specklestream. Comments? 00:57, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Pretty! :3 03:45, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. c: Thanks Misty. 13:09, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Runningstorm (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to be defined. OA was Splook. Comments? 13:09, July 19, 2012 (UTC)