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Shrewtooth (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Iceheart and the shading was blotchy. Comments? 17:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it? I can't tell the difference between the lineart and the base color. 19:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'd personally prefer it stay this dark. Not being able to see all of the lineart isn't the end of the world. Shrewtooth is a black cat, not dark gray. 19:55, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps blur the shading's edges? Mainly the body shading. 06:27, 22, 03, 2012

Reuploaded 04:58, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights a little on the face. Breeze whisker  17:57, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the "highlights" on the tail? 20:28, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot to say it a while ago. 01:31, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Stick (Cat) (W) - Redone
Original artist was Goldenpaw, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 18:09, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you defin the tail and haunch shading a tad? Nicely done as always :) 18:11, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the ear and erase the two single pixels that point out. (If you know what I mean). 00:12, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, too~ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 04:42, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:55, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 07:04, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred as much as I could. 17:13, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink/Make it stand out more. Great work! 07:51, 27, 03, 2012

Reuploaded Wait for changes... 20:00, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Palefoot (W) - Redone
OA was Rainbreath with a redo by me. Redone mostly because I didn't like to stripes. Classic tabby fail. 15:29, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink and (maybe) blur the stripes? 08:20, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Mitzi (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Hawktalon. Redone because unrealistic stripes and in my opnion didn't look like a tortoiseshell. Comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:55, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the ear pink? If it's there, define it please. 13:59, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Hold up, Elo, the whole tortie description has been thrown into question. This might have to be changed. 21:33, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Should I change it now? or what? x.x.  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 00:22, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' on chat last night we established her real description, a two-toned gray and white cat. comments? C: -- Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 20:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudges ever so slightly so she doesn't look prickly. Very pretty! 22:04, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful job, Elo~ 01:17, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (D) - Redone
Its isn't something extra...needed to match elder...OA is Bracken-. ,19:54,March 26,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 19:02, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded ,18:59,March 27,2012

Define/sharpen the highlights c: 03:15, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  11:14, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Willowshine (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to look like the MCA image. Man, this was a difficult pattern to transfer onto a kit. DX 01:27, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. :3 But shouldn't the nose be black? Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 02:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

No, not all dark gray cats have black noses. 02:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * derp* XP Blur the earpink then? C: Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 07:58, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  19:44, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more >3< 00:48, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing a tthe moment, dear. 01:00, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Princess (KP) ~ Redone
They said I could be anything. So I became a pointed tabby. Haha, anyway, this is how I've always imagined Princess, actually. Comments? 02:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad? 02:24, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

FINALLY A POINTED TABBY! *celebrates* Add some shading to her back paw. 03:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And color in the tag. XD 07:21, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It was colored in, but I've defined it witha different shade. 00:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. <3 This is gorgeous Shelly! 06:45, 29, 03, 2012

Mistkit (SC) (Ki) - Redone
....... I burned it. owo 'Tis Chubacca's supposed daughter. This is what happens when you tell me to make a floofy character at 3am. XD Anyways, shading and fur needed to be redone. No clue who the OA was since Loonie renamed the image. Yes I'm gonna crop it, yes I know it's tinted blue, no I'm not gonna change that. Other comments? 21:14, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, that might be a bit much... tone it down a bit, eh? 21:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Kinkfur's just as bad.... it's just cause this is a smaller blank. I'd really rather not, but if others agree I will. 21:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but I agree with Shelly. It's too much and almost overwhelming to look at 22:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

OA was me. She does kinda look like a silver pinecone xP Maybe add some fuzz between her ears? Kinky has it. 22:08, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should keep her that fluffy. And I quote: "The kit's pale grey pelt was as spiky as a pinecone." 23:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just crop the image O_o 23:03, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno about toning it down...but blur the earpink? Lucky she's not an apprentice, lol Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:40, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think the floof should stay, personally. It looks great. 8D Can you define/darken the shading a smidge? 23:46, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Her eyes look purple. Is that just my computer? o3o Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 06:14, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Such mixed answers..... seems like more people want me to keep it if you count Scarlet's comment as saying yes, as she actually is described as looking like a pinecone. xD And the eyes were meant to be blue, but they ended up a bit farther towards puprle than I meant. XD fixed that. 14:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

You shrank the image size, not the canvas size. Guess you're going to have to revert to the previous version and try again. 17:13, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the Wiki is being screwy and doing a bunch of dumb resizing to images. I checked and she didn't shrink it. ^^  18:27, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki) - Tweaked
Original artist was me, just needed to be lightened. Comments? 21:48, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

The gray doesn't quite match the warrior...color pick, perhaps? 13:32, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Redone
OA's were Cloudskye, Elorisa. Needed to be redone to match the kit ~. Comments? :3 22:26, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that ear pink. 22:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the stripes on the apprentice more closely. They need to be darker, more textured, and they need to conform to the shape of his body. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

His main coloring needs to be a bit darker to match as well. Also, try to match the ear pink on the other images and don't have it so low that it leaks into his forehead. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Uh Shelly, the apprentice is being redone to match the kit. 01:31 Thu Mar 29

The stripes don't match the kit, either, and the kit is essentially the apprentice with thinner stripes. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. (Sorry if what Shelly already said covers this). 06:41, 29, 03, 2012

Re-uploaded. I don't think the changes are showing. I fixed the stripes and they match a whole lot better. Blurred the earpink as well. 19:16, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
...I don't have much to say about this one. OA was Echomist, and the highlights needed to be blurred and toned down. File changes aren't showing yet, I assume. 23:32, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Nice :3 Blur the highlights. 23:34, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

...File changes aren't showing yet. This is the old version. =3 23:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Oh..I'm sorry Dx. 23:38, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Crowfrost (W) ~ Redone
My kitty, Homer! 8D The patches were oversmudged and blurred, and the pattern in general isn't possible...or something like that. OA be Sandstar12, with a tweak by Cloudskye. ^^ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 05:59, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! I like this much better. XD Define the shading a bit. 09:29, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you shrink and redden the ear pink? Daaaaang, Skt. Wonderful job~ 21:56, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading too. 21:57, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and I re-did the shading. Again, Cloudy adores black kittehs. Also, there's a good chance changes aren't showing, but y'all should know which one the new file is. 09:54, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (W) - Redone
As promised, I killed the stripes. >:D I think I may just like Bumble more now. Wow so many OAs on this.... Nightshine with a tweak by Leggy, then by Trolly, then by Loonie. Stripes were unrealistic. 14:29, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Harveymoon (W) - Redone
Anti-gravity kitteh. OA is Mousetalon, with a tweak by me. I took the lineart from Macgyver, upon Paleh's suggestion. Changes probably aren't showing again.... 14:37, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the collar match the kittypet and add a bit more shading to the top of the haunch. 16:18, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

lol, no. Someone doesn't read. The collar stays purple. Nowhere does it say that it has to match. I'll fix the shading, though. 18:11, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rude comment from me was killed 'cause it was rude. 18:20, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (SC) - Redone
OA was Shimmerpool with a redo by me. Color and stripes just looked off.... I took the colors from Russetfur's apprentice. Comments? 15:11, March 29, 2012 (UTC)