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Tanglewhisker (E) - Tweaked
OA is Hawky with a tweak by Leafstrike.

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Thistleclaw (W) ~ Redone
oa's include bramble, mintstarr, shelly, silver, and jayce who was awesome enough to give me this and upload for me ;-; 11:06 Fri Oct 2

This should use the old linear art- it wasn't nominated for a linear tweak. Very pretty btw, maybe try erasing a little bit of the texture on the edge of the paws and the face so that it would look less grey. 11:36, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Jayce told me they didn't mind me using new lineart; I'll change it if you want it, but... 12:19 Fri Oct 2

idk but I was told to do it in the past... So... 12:20, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

I literally don't care either way. Given that it's explicitly stated he was named after his spiky fur, I think the more spikyness, the better. I was going to say that on the other images, but the apprentice was archived before I got the chance.

Should I nominate the apprentice? 12:26, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

If you believe it should be, yes. I mean, given that ragged fur can change over time, I don't think you'd need to 30000% match Berry's style, but he could use more spiky fur. Anyways, Berry, could you define the ear pink? I actually didn't think he had any the first time I saw this.

Blur/smudge the shading a bit? 16:04, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, personally. Smooth out that white patch on his cheek, it looks a little too sharp compared to the other patches. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:30, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

White looks gray on the face 01:01, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

its fine, you can tell its white. 10:05, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded ty jayce 12:56 Tue Oct 6

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Mist (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA is DJAngelCandy. Tweaked for flat shading. 00:50, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the light on the legs? 02:01, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:57, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs farthest from us a bit more pls 19:56, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's that? 15:48, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

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