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Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here.

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail?

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail?

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean.

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match?

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional.  16:01 Sat Feb 6 

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Hawkpaw (SC) (A) - For Approval
so comments? I know the ear pink looks a little bad. 16:42, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, as I can't see any at all.

Re-Upps— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:58, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

The shading still really needs to be darkened. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:00, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the ear pink 17:36, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

I see some waste. 18:47, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes more yellow? They look amber to me, but feel free to disregard this if they're not.

Re-Upps— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 14:52, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the shading needs to be darkened a lot more, I can't see it at all. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:11, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

This is going to sound really annoying, but I really cannot see the shading well, and in the areas where I can, it is very hard-edged. I have looked on multiple screens, and consistently cannot clearly see the shading. Darken the shading a lot and blur/smudge/whatever it. I'm sorry if this came off as rude, that was not my intention at all. 18:48 Wed Jan 27

Can I suggest you lighten the base slightly it will help the shading stand out. 22:14, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps that's as light as I can go or it''ll look like a regular gray.— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 18:15, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks black to me and I think it is possible for you to lighten it more but I don't know. 20:15, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'll upload soon.— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:08, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

The shading needs to be darkened and smoothed out a bit. 22:25, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink seems a tad bit too neon, although that might just be me. 00:42, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

will upload tomorrow.— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 23:39, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Could you blur the earpink a little more and add depth to the shading? 15:17 Wed Feb 3

Still working?

Yes— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:12, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has gone over one week without uploads, so I'd need to decline it anyways due to PCA's guidelines, which are clearly stated at the top of the page.

I'll take over. <span style="">16:29, 02/5/2016

Reuploaded <span style="">17:09, 02/5/2016

he looks a bit blue. 23:02, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Whoops, didn't realize it was /that/ blue <span style="">23:20, 02/6/2016

Rileypaw (A) ~ CBA
I did a thing. And it is glorious. 01:21, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the dark gray stripes around his legs, maybe? This is great. Jaysnow (talk) 01:22, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

There wouldn't be much shading there to begin with, since the lightsource is shining on his legs closest to us. Could I possibly get a second opinion? 02:13, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Good point.... Jaysnow (talk) 02:15, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the stomach and chest shading a bit, and define it everywhere else....if there is any. I honestly can't tell.

reups I defined it on the legs but since my light source is shining from nearly directly onto them, I'd like not to define it any more 13:30, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest and belly some?  <span style="">13:56 Wed Jan 27 

Define the shading a little more on the very bottom of the belly? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

He does have a paler belly, is that what you're seeing? If not, what exactly do you mean? 15:10, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Also if i lighten it any more ill be told to define the shading depth everywhere else again since theyre on the same layer. Ill get to it when i get home. 18:18, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

at least one of his ears should be dark grey. 19:04, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

reups This is as much as I am lightening it for the sake of keeping shading depth 13:57, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

reups again accidentally left the stripes layer on normal 14:40, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading on the haunch?

The source is coming nearly directly onto the haunch? 04:22, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Fox. The haunch looks pretty flat to me. You don't need to expand it a lot, just some.  <span style="">11:02 Mon Feb 1 

reups If the shading needs to be darkened again let me know, it did a weird thing 01:05, February 4, 2016 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  16:26, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reups 00:18, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 18:59, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Rileypaw (Kit) - For Approval
Right let's try this again... I will make him short haired and add a coller if need. 16:59, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base coat, as well as thin out the stripes and add more? You have to match Snowdapple's apprentice image, I don't know if you've seen.  <span style="">17:05 Wed Jan 27 

darken the tail shading as well I can barely see it— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 17:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Youll need to add a collar since he was a kittypet. Also do you need my file? 18:16, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Does he need a collar? I am having trouble putting a collar on a long haired blank. 18:37, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

You can borrow the collar lineart from Stormcloud's kit image if you like. I can send you an image with just the lineart if you want.  <span style="">18:42 Wed Jan 27 

Also technically wouldnt you need to wait until blossompaw was archived before posting this? 19:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think they would, since it was mistakenly reserved/posted, and the other artist came forward to claim it? Not sure in this situation though. Sorry I don't have anything constructive to say on the art, but it's all been said. <span style="">19:17, 01/27/2016

That would be great Shinx and actually Snowdapple would it be possible for me to get that file. I want to re do him 20:10, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hope this helps :)  <span style="">20:21 Wed Jan 27 

Reupload fixed collar and stripes. 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the base to match the apprentice? <span style="">21:13, 01/27/2016

Um it's the same I colour picked? 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

It looks much darker. Either define the light, or make sure you didn't colorpick from a shaded part. Define the shading depth too.  <span style="">21:42 Wed Jan 27 

Reupload defined shading and lightened 21:51, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hey shinx could you do me a flavor and give velvet the file? Im out of town rn 22:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Sure thing buddy- Velvet, do you have an e-mail or something I can send it to?  <span style="">22:20 Wed Jan 27 

Yeah sure it's Leia.clark@gmail.com 22:21, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened base 23:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Remove the collar. It is not said anywhere in Ravenpaw's Farewell that Riley had a collar, and it's an assumption to say that he did have one.

I will remove it only if more people say 11:57, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

It's an assumption to have the collar, Velvet. Assumptions are not allowed on character pixels, so you have to remove it. It doesn't matter if people disagree; if there's no mention of a collar (which there is not), then he doesn't get one. Simple as that.

Remove the collar. Also make both ears dark gray, as seen on the loner image 14:38, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload there is no need to get angry. I just did want to remove the collar only to be told to put it back on. Any way removed it and my kit always had grey ears. 18:26, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading. 22:19, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload defined shading 09:23, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the parts that aren't darker, such as the legs and head, neck, etc. Also, is there texture on this? I can't make it out, since mine does have texture. There are also pale parts that need to be on the muzzle, neck, chest, underbelly, and paws. Did you get the file from Shinx? 13:59, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I played around with the texture slightly but if I add too much it looks messie. Also lightened paws but were they really ment to be paler I never knew. 17:36, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading.

The shading is getting a little too flat, could you define the light? 04:23, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened him, he looks like a wee white tiger. 08:12, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add a little more shading around the edges? The shading depth could be defined a little, and it appears it might be leaking just a tad. Also, define the shading on <-- leg and the tail. 02:49, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload difined shading 16:27, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the texture, please. <span style="">15:18 Wed Feb 3

Reupload I am having so much bother with this texture! 18:35, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Can you define the pale parts? 20:19, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reupload  lightened pale parts 21:15, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading need. 01:03, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I meant more, sorry. 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened shading 14:52, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

This is actually starting to get a bit too bright in comparison to the apprentice image. Dull down the overall pelt color, and define the pale muzzle, chest, underbelly, and paws please. 23:41, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Patch (RF) (KP) - For Approval
Will tweak the pattern after I finish my assignments. BCPrincess, I adore this design^.^ <span style="">13:45 Tue Feb 2

Smudge the markings more? <span style="">3:45 Wed Feb 3

I think the markings match fine. 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

A little bit of smudging wouldn't hurt. Princess' markings on her image are a bit softer than on this one.

Reuploaded <span style="">01:24 Thu Feb 4

Could you smooth out the shading on the back leg a bit? Beautiful work ^^ <span style="">00:54 Sat Feb 6

And the back and face.

I am having computer trouble. I will hopefully be able to update this but I'm not sure if I will still have the file after I manage to fix whatever is going on. Just a warning. <span style="">14:54 Sat Feb 6

Pasha (KP) - For Approval
probably gonna redo this later. i was in a hurry. <span style="">21:48 Tue Feb 2

Could you maybe lighten the base slightly so we can see the shading? 22:19, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base is fine, as the description does state very clearly "almost black" but could you define facial shading just a smidge? 03:23, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This could be my screen but he looks too dark to be "almost black". Perhaps a darkness like Crowfeather would do.

Define the shading depth? <span style="">15:19 Wed Feb 3

I think the darkness is fine but can you add some more eye ddepth? Unless it's there and I can't see it. 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base could be lightened a little bit- she was supposed to be almost black, and this looks black. Crowfeather's shade would work wonderfully for this, I think. I also think the shading could be darkened a bit too.

can you make him more brown too. 15:22, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. Some said Crowfeather and Skt said brown so I tried to split the difference <span style="">00:53 Sat Feb 6

Why would he need to be brown? He was never described as "dark brown, nearly black" W~

The collar looks flat. Define the shading on it please.

He's not specified as dark grey or dark ginger or anything, so the default would be brown, correct?  <span style="">11:37 Sat Feb 6 

yes, it would be. :T 11:46, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Bellapaw (Lo) ~ For Approval
I tried to match Berry's apprentice while Rileypaw was on CBA, but I couldn't ;_; So instead have a classic tabby  <span style="">19:15 Fri Feb 5 

Maybe you could make her colors more like Firestar's? She is said to look exactly like him after all. 22:01, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

I've been playing around for a little while and honestly I can't ake the colors any more like Firestar's whilst still matching the pale orange description. I even colorpicked and just made the colors lighter- it still doesn't like anything like Firestar. Unless you can give me a color that's both pale orange //and// looks like Firestar..?  <span style="">23:35 Fri Feb 5 

Mind if I play around with a new pattern/colors on the apprentice and see if I can get it to look more like Firestar but still light? If not, that's totally fine, I'll match this. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:49, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I'd much rather keep the pattern like this if possible (I'm really proud of it) but mess with the color all you like. Would you like the file?  <span style="">11:08 Sat Feb 6 

Larkwing (FQ) (MC) ~ For Approval
01:07, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Willowshine (MC) ~ For Approval
01:07, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Barkface (MC) - For Approval
bork bork <span style="">01:26, 02/7/2016

Could you shorten the tail just a little bit more? Maybe... by no more than six pixels, if that? Seems a bit too long as it is.

Aww, so cute <3 Could you blend the shading break on the chest a little? <span style="">03:02 Sun Feb 7

Icewhisker (MC) - For Approval
This looked better in gimp. :/ 01:37, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and eye depth.

Leafpool (MC) - For Approval
Also looked better in gimp. 01:59, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) ~ For Approval
hmm 02:44, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC) ~ For Approval
Oh my god this pattern. I noticed the waste after I uploaded, I'll get it next upload.  <span style="">02:46 Sun Feb 7