Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 129

Reena (Ro) (K) - Approved
You wouldn't believe how fast I finished this. I know the shading is icky. Thanks Burntclaw for the help on this image. :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:58, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Damnit the shading was leaking The Fox Girl (talk) 03:00, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaastteee I used my sister's account again... -_- The Fox Girl (talk) 03:54, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receeding from the lineart. Also, while your at it define the shading on the tabby parts, please. Well done, Fox =) 03:57, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

RE-UPS The Fox Girl (talk) 09:25, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

I believe the file name for this is supposed to be Reena (Ro).kit.png 19:48, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Hmmm.... Her rouge version is named Renna_rouge, I think. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:08, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay ^^. 00:23, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

No its name should be Reena_(Ro).kit.png and the rogue would most likely already be named Reena_(Ro).rogue.png...so yeah. .-. 16:39, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Tiger was right the first time she commented. It should be File:Reena (Ro).kit.png, and I'll rename it now. Not everyone knows that Reena is actually named after her aunt, and there are two of them. The _ in the file name really doesn't matter.

Define the shading more--on the pattern only. 14:16, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Not sure if changes are showing The Fox Girl (talk) 07:54, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Brightflower (Ki) - Approved
Tried out Jayie's shading style which I love <3. I adore her cute lil' muzzle. The eyes are larger because in her description it states that she has "wide-set amber eyes" so I just wanted to add emphasis on that. Colour & design taken from the warrior & queen pixels. all the kittens    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:51, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Forgot the pale paws. ._.    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:59, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I fixed the alignment for you^^ Also, define the stripes a bit, as they're more pronounced on her other images. And define the shading & shading depth. This is pretty =) 13:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the eyes are normal on the other images, and you //need// to match that, so make them normal size please. And define the shading. 13:53, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you Frosty for fixing the alignment! I've defined the stripes, shrunk the eyes, shading & shading depth. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:05, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? 03:45, 11/30/2014

can you blur and maybe thicken the shading everywhere not on the head? 03:49, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? I kinda can't see them. This is really cute, though.

Re-uploaded - Thank you! All change have been added, although having some trouble with the stripes. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is making her looks pretty green in those areas. Try tinting it a dark red? 00:34, 12/2/2014

The only place she "looks green" is probably the paws. Everywhere else looks fine to me, imho. Again, as I've said before, tinting shading is not mandatory, Ruefrost, so please do not think you're under any obligation to do so- you can do whatever you're comfortable with doing.

Lighten the shading, I can't see the pattern through it. It could also be expanded a bit, 'cause she's looking a tad bit flat. 15:30, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened the shading, defined the pattern, tweaked the muzzle slightly & define the shading (kinda..)   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:38, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? The shading still looks green on the paws. The Fox Girl (talk) 03:08, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. The Fox Girl (talk) 06:21, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 14:22, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the paws? It looks.. blotchy, for lack of a better word? If you think its fine, feel free to ignore me. :)-- 20:50, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Completed all of the above. Defined the leg/foot shading to make it darker and more noticeable. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:58, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten your shading I can't see the pattern through it. And I personally think that the black shading is throwing the color off a bit. I strongly recommend you tint your shading. But if you wish not to, I will not longer speak of it. 21:02, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Um, did I not say before don't say to tint the shading if they haven't already? It's already been mentioned multiple times, and if she would have wanted to, she'd have done it before now. Seriously, please stop asking. This goes for everyone. I think the black shading looks fine. You can use black on anything and it'll look just fine- I rarely ever tint my shading and most of mine is actually pure black. =/

Oh whoops I didn't know it had already been mention. :x I rarely tint mine either, it's 95% of the time black. But sometimes when it's a certain base color you have to accommodate so it doesn't look like it's clashing. Unless you put it on super super light and then you can't see it. Meh anyway sorry for repeating. But my comment still stands on lightening the shading^^ 03:45, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - It's fine Frosty don't stress. I probably should of told you (my bad).Thank you to for telling Snow. I've lightened the shading. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Im sorry for breaking the CBA, but can you please lighten the paw shading? It looks really dark and hard-edged as it is now.-- 04:22, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

The shading in between the legs, too ^^ 22:51, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened paw shading I don't wish to lighten it any more else the shading will be too light. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:57, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Let's try again, shall we? If you lighten anything anymore, you really won't be able to see it at all.

Approved.

Fritz (RP) (Ki) - Approved
I had so much fun with this..and I think it turned out wonderfully. Comments? 21:44, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

There's a faint texture on the white as well for the kittypet. It's hard to see, but it's there. I would know- I made that image based off a different one. Also move the collar down a couple pixels- it seems too far up near the head.

Re-uploaded. Thanks for telling me that..my eyes are pretty damn awful, so I wasn't sure if that was texture or an effect from the shading. Also I moved the collar down a few pixels^^ 22:42, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Language... Besides that could you define the ear pink? Really all it is, is grey. Like it a lot, though User:NikiandCats 23:33, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

'Damn' is an acceptable word to use here. It's used all the time and since we're all 13 or older, we can handle a word like that. She was fine in using it as she was talking about herself and not directing it towards another user or their work.

Re-uploaded.  Thank you~ That was the color I had picked from the kittypet's ear, but I defined it by altering it a shade or two, but that's all I'll alter it. And yeah as they said^^ 00:07, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on the tail? This looks nice! ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:19, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! 00:33, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, fixed some things hoping that'll get this approved faster. 04:09, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Brighten up the white and lighten up the shading just a bit. It's throwing off the color and making this look darker than his kittypet. Or, as an alternative, you could always thin out the shading. Also, I dunno if you got it, but the base is #B8B8B8. You probably can't tell because of the texture, so I thought I'd give you the coding.

Re-uploaded. Thanks for the coding, I think I was a few shades off before.. Also I screwed around with the shading until the white wasn't gray and the shading wasn't throwing off the color. 19:23, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading and tail shading? 03:52, 12/11/2014

I'd say define the shading in general. I can hardly see it anywhere. 04:00, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. eep you guys are killing me. XD But seriously this last upload is all I can define it or else we'll be back to where I was told to lighten it all up, and we'll have darkened white and messed up color. So yeah. 13:21, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little, please? 18:26, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I trust your judgment all the way Shinx, but could I get a second opinion? I'm afraid if I define it anymore that the white won't be white anymore and that the color will be thrown off again. As long as it's making it more visible, I might be able to do that, but darkening is a no. So may I get another opinion? Thanks. 02:28, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Have another layer of shading that's unblurred a bit on a lower opacity. That should fix the issue. I think it could be defined a bit, and you can do that without making it darker at all.

Re-uploaded. Did as suggested. 14:49, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.