Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 222

Woodpaw (App) - Approved


Second attempt at doing a charart. Let's hope my files don't get deleted 04:48, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images, or, in your case, have |left in the file. :) 05:15, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define your light source? (or at least the light on the face)? 05:32 Fri Apr 12 2019

Reuploaded - Tried to define the head light source a bit. I imagine that it's a setting sun glowing overhead, slightly setting down over it's rump. (If that makes sense)  06:05, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the leg light coukd be defined more, can't really see it.  Ellie  life is an illusion 06:00, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Which leg, sorry? 06:05, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

All of them, imo.  Ellie  life is an illusion 06:19, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

I am. I need to redo it sometime tomorrow, though, as my art program crashed and killed all the files 13:16, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to fix shading. 10:17, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the chest and belly a tad? I love this ^^ Malina457 (talk) 15:37, April 17, 2019 (UTC)malina

Based on your light source I feel like there should be shading on the shoulder and the < side of the thigh. They look flat compared to the feet. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:36, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened the shading with additional shading suggestions from Fox, also added more shading around the shoulder and thigh. 03:01, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading on the haunch closer to the thicker part of the leg?  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:52, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Can you please redline? I'm not quite sure what you mean. 04:00, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

This is what Mink meant. 22:30, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thank you, Greenflower! Attempted to put more shading in the area mentioned. 02:56, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

If you don't mind, try smoothing the haunch shading some as well  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:33, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Smoothed shading on hutch and tried to give the shading a slightly more smooth appearance to match. 14:55, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:34, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 17:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shellfur (W) ~ Approved
fox helped with this boy, he's such a cutie. i adore this design.  Ellie  life is an illusion 05:40, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

some of the shading is leaking away from the back leg closest to us 07:48 Wed Apr 17 2019

Could you redline where you mean? I'm having trouble seeing it  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:02, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

looks like it's on the bottom of the haunch. Also, this is your choice but could you consider removing the cream on the haunch? it wasn't really part of his original design on his kit

The kit won't show it, as the new kit blank shows the same side as the apprentice and I really like his cream there.  Ellie  life is an illusion 18:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the design that the kit had should be followed, Mink. This is Fox's pattern, so her choices should be respected. Please remove the cream. ​​​

I agree with mink, the kit wont even show this side, no other blank does actually. Malina457 (talk) 23:01, April 17, 2019 (UTC)Malina

No, I agree with Fox and Jayce. 23:07, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

The redone kit will show more of the haunch, and given that the apprentice does not have this kind of haunch style with the cream, the pattern still needs to be matched. I'm getting quite tired of the disregard for the kit images despite the fact that Fox is still here and still holds claim over the master pattern. ​​​​​​​

I'm removing the cream, I'll reup when I'm home. That was just to fill that space that was bare. So yeah, I'll remove it.  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:29, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups removed the cream. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:49, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think he needs another ginger patch on his bum to match the apprentice? this has too much black on the haunch <span style="">18:11, 04/18/2019

I'm a little confused here? This blank shows a different side but I'm suppose to make the patch placement the same as the opposite side? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:59, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

As from what I'm seeing on the apprentice, this is the opposite side and doesn't show on neither the kit nor the apprentice. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:00, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think it looks ok

Alright, in that case I'm gonna leave it as is. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:01, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good. CBA? 15:31, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 17:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)