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=Tweaking=

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
Added teh stripes to the tail~Comments? 11:08, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the stripes? They make the tail look purple. Skt Spoilers... 12:51, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaed o3o 11:58, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Try and make them look like her apprentice's. 20:29, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Just take the color you're using right now and up the red value. 05:47 Tue Jun 26

No, the stripes on this are fine. It's the apprentice that needs to match the elder, since it was put up first.

Actually since the kit's already approved, the color needs to match that one. Either ask Mounty for the colors, or simply listen to what she said about making it more red and you should be fine. 05:57, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Kay so I used #aa4b34 06:03 Tue Jun 26

Re-uploaded 06:46, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes seem to sorta get lost in the shading. The color I used for that was #5d2316.

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes and make the ear-pink a bit redder 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The furry effect needs to be smudged an blurred, and perhaps lightened. It looks like tabby stripes on the brown. 06:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't smudge it, because it's smudged to the limit; but it has been blurred. The earpink will remain untouched, since it's from the warrior. 16:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brown's too dark and the furry texture still looks like stripes. 00:30, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Which brown? The main one, or the texture brown? 18:17, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to her tail. Comments? 19:25, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 22:36, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And this is what happens when you forget to save the xcf. file -_-  01:54, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more? c: 05:54 Sat Jun 23

Reuploaded Tried :P  02:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be darkened. 18:03, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened it just a tad bit more. I could darken it a little more if it still isn't that visible, but I just want to be careful and make sure people can still see the stripes. 02:08, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the elder, please?

Actually they need to match the kit since that was the first approved, rather than the first put up. And I think they're rather close to the kit right now, so I'd say they're fine. 05:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Lo) ~ Redone
Before anyone starts complaining, I did get permission to redo this. It didn't match in the slightest and would have been really hard to tweak. Since it's my image I don't see a problem with redoing it. Comments?

Can you blur the smudges a little more?

Re-uploaded 20:33 Sun Jun 24

Blur the haunch shading a bit. Skt Spoilers... 22:29, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:50 Sun Jun 24

Define the shading on the head. Breeze whisker  16:52, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:23 Wed Jun 27

Hollowflight (A) - Redone
- His pale belly went too far into his stomach, he was too dark, and his stripes were too oversmudged. And oh my god I failed on this one. Especially the smudging...Comments? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! :3 Just smudge the pale belly a bit to look like the other image. ^^  02:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

His pale belly isn't smudged in his warrior...at least, not as far as I can tell. 02:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yes it is. Please smudge it. 06:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

And can you make the unshaded brown a tad lighter? (I think that's the word I'm after) Skt Spoilers... 10:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Skt, the "unshaded" brown's color code was taken from the warrior image. But if others agree, I'll lighten it. 18:00, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but I agree. Either that or thin out the shading a bit and add/brighten the highlights. 05:25, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to have to re-do this because I got my computer back and my file isn't on this....and the computer I was doing Hollowpaw on is broken. So this is going to be redone later. 17:15, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Redone. 22:59, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

forgot the white pixels in the eyes? XD 23:40, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: ...I'm an epic fail. 23:43, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E) - Tweaked
Tweaked color to be more brown. I think this is too dark though. OA was Paleh (I think) Comments? e.e 08:05, 25, 06, 2012

I dunno about the darkness, but make the skin less fluro. Skt Spoilers... 12:42, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I so failed on that. -has no brain- xDDD 10:01, 26, 06, 2012

Can you make the patches a little less neon? 15:38, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  09:32, 27, 06, 2012

Nightwhisper (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Scarlet and I re-did the shading ouo Comments? 09:21, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Skt Spoilers... 11:05, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I also lightened the shdaing. I felt it was too dark~ 09:47, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't really look brown, in my opinion... Can you fix that? 15:57, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

The base pelt colour came from the original warrior. o.0 06:15, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

While it's up you need to change the color, and also to match the rogue image. :3 09:35, 27, 06, 2012

Oakheart (Alt.Kit) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to match alt deputy. Not sure about changes. 17:58, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? Unless it already matches the deputy. 17:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:32, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just made her a bit darker to match her other images. 02:20, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading, if possible?

Reuploaded  02:32, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad, and make the shading less brown tinted and more of a grayish color for consistancy. :3 09:22, 26, 06, 2012

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing, I believe. ^^  15:53, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the belly highlight, and the haunch one too? 17:49, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also blur the ear pink a tiny bit? 15:43, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Birdy (Ki) ~ Tweaked


I swear on my family and friend and my first unborn child's lives, I swear on my Aunt Tina and Patpa's graves, I swear to the face of God. This isn't redone. I say that very solemly. I opned up her files I saved, delted her shading file(Only way to tweak her shading) and redid her shading, killed the blurred lineart, and made the blob on her forehead look like a stripe. OA was Sandstar12 with a redone by some freak named Padfoot. Comments? 02:25, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Oi, Maple. That's not really necessary... Anyways, define the shading.

Define and enlarge the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 10:56, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I said that, Skye, because I showed it to some people, and they all thought it looked redone. The shading...I'll fix that now. To dark in some places.... 17:00, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Could you also give it a light source? Right now, it just seems like a blotch of shading.

Reuploaded. 17:27, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo) ~ Redone
Took both the pelt and shading colors from the main queen and kittypet's colors, since the alt queen doesn't really match the other images that well. OA was Thistleshine, and it had to match the other images better. Comments? I seem to be the only one who actually likes doing cream cats. 05:34, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly shading? <3 Love it! 15:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And the leg shading. 21:39, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Which leg Icey? 05:53, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

'Reuploaded - Just did Misty's request, still waiting on Icy's answer. Frankly I thought the belly shading was fine, all placements don't have to be the same and that showed depth fine. But I changed it anyways. I still think it was fine before, but I'll leave that for you guys to decide. 11:27, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

The back leg closest to us - could you also blur the midriff shading? Nevermind. xD 15:44, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (W) - Tweaked
See apprentice ^^ Comments? 01:16, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit? 18:28, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste between the tail and body. Also somewhere else that I forget.-- 18:30, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:29, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:42, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pattern a bit. 23:41, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad as well. 00:14, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Velvet (KP) ~ Redone
OA was Bramble, I think. Not sure. Anyways, she needed to be redone for multiple reasons. She wasn't silver, and the shading needed to be redone.

Blur/smudge the texture a little so it looks more natural. 01:24, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a smidge. Beautiful. ;) <3 01:25, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ear pink matches the queen, so it's fine.

Could you darken the shading a tad? 23:38, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, actually.

Hmmm...can you brighten up the grey then? It looks a tad darker than the queen. Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats  00:23, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Velvet (Q) ~ Redone
OA is me, and it needed to be redone for the same reasons as the KP. I'd have tweaked this, but I lose the .xcf'

Lighten the shading in the stomach area. This is beautiful <3 01:24, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the tail shading~ Skt Spoilers... 01:28, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur the shading some more, mainly the body shading~ :3 09:49, 27, 06, 2012

There's a smidge of waste under the base of the tail. Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats  15:47, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Lighten the shading and blur the belly "highlight". 00:24, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (W) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to the tail. OA was Frostheart. Comments? 16:29 Wed Jun 27

Willowbreeze (Q) - Tweaked
Since the apprentice got archived, I suppose I have to write something now.... Gosh....  Tweaked pattern to make stripes a bit pointier/smudgier. Everything else is the same. Might've darkened the shading... I forget... <Scarlet Derp Moment Comments? 23:14, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste that's flying behind her back. 23:33, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 23:39, June 27, 2012 (UTC)