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Thistleclaw (Alt. W) - For Approval
As he's shown in The Rise of Scourge. 18:15, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

(As I am too lazy to look it up) did you ever get rid of one of your three reservations so you can do this? 18:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

No. If I was supposed to, then decline this. -_- 18:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind. 18:23, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the ear-pink, and there is some gray in between the he haunch, and back paw, and make him long-furred, he looks long-furred. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:50, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Theres waste between his legs - 18:53, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink? :) . 18:57, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen the ear pink and center it while dulling it.Also smudge the paws and tone down the highlights if your using them. Also darken the shading a touch. Very accurate! 21:08, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's dark enough. .-. However, can you blur it and blend it with the highlights a little more (if you use them, that is)? 21:11, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you please blur the neck shading? Star shine ☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 21:43, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

His legs are shown as dark grey, not black. 02:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

You forget color one leg..or he have only three dark legs? Leaf-storm,16:45,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: He only has three dark legs. 16:52, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and blur the highlights a lot. 19:19, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ear-pink is fine, Sand. Define the highlight on the face and middle of the tail a bit more. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:07, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste, make the earpink just a tad smaller (sorry Scarlet, but she's right) and move the chest highlight to the left a tad/thin out the shading on the left of the chest and thicken it on the right. 00:42 Tue Nov 15

Just letting you guys know that I probably won't be able to work on this until Friday, because of school. 11:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the high-light into the pelt a little bit more please. 01:50 Thu Nov 17

There's some waste under the belly. 19:23, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the eyes be amber unless they said otherwise? Trollsky  She who Trolls everything 01:33, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. 05:31, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlight a bit. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  17:15, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail? 22:12, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Moon? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:20, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

I could take over if Moonflight isn't working on/uploading this anymore. 08:15, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I belive you have to wait for that person to say they aren't working on this. For all we know, Moonflight's internet could be down. Just be patient. 00:16, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

If it's been a week without work, DJ, you may take over. 00:20, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -  shouldn't this charart have white markings on the face, because that's how he was shown in the Rise of Scourge? 07:51, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it should. Blur the tail tip and the ear pink. It's very blotchy. Blur the shading too. 22:01, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading, the rest looks fine to me. 02:05 Thu Nov 24

I think the shading looks fine. It shows the size of his shoulder well. Maybe smudge/blur the darker part on the front leg a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 02:14, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I don't really like the white markings. I blurred the shading just a bit anyway. 05:54, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading as it looks flat. Neat! 01:59, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, the shading look... awkward, because of the smudging, if other people agree with me, do you think you could fix it? 12:39 Sun Nov 27

Try blurring the shading, not smudging. You also have blurred lineart near his muzzle, tail and a bit on his haunch. Also, make the earpink more triangular. Sorry for all this. xD  21:59, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I redid the shading, and the white face markings still bug me. 06:17, Mon, Nov, 28, 2011

Better. Smooth out the shading a little more. 20:39, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white markings and there is waste around the image. 21:15, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. -- 01:16, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 06:00, Tue, Nov, 29, 2011

There is waste under the chin and smudged lineart on the tail. And blur the earpink. 20:59, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -the lineart and waste is bugging me, I bet the next comment will be on that. Also now the earpink sucks... 07:38, Wed, Nov, 30, 2011

o.o *meep* There's waste near the tail lineart. .3.  20:44, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

My dear apprentice! *so proud* iz good. Make the earpink a tad lighter and blur it :3 01:50 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded -  I never knew it was this good Wildheart.. xD Thanks. Yes I knew the next comment would be on waste. I hope there's none left. 05:53, Thu, Dec, 1, 2011

It is very good :3 but try taking the earpink from here. 04:06 Fri Dec 2

Reuploaded - I <3 this charart. <span style="">06:02, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Reuploaded -  Now I've got GIMP lets see how this works. <span style="">23:16, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011 Blur the white on the tail, and try and smudge it a bit to give it a "furry" look. 23:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  like this? I must say this looks spunkeh! <span style="">00:02, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011

Looks good! ^^ Just blur the smudging a bit, and there's so smudged lineart on the tail, so fix that too. Nice. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:37, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. <span style="">05:31, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

I love this :) Blur the earpink, and this might be ready. 03:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks, I just made it worse. <span style="">07:40, Wed, Dec, 7, 2011

Lighten the white on his face. 00:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  <span style="">07:57, Thu, Dec, 8, 2011

Cinders (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yep, Cinders is Sol's mother. I went by what I saw in the manga. Sorry I didn't get to add it to the table. I'm not back on it yet. 00:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the patches. Nice work. 00:48, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, darken the earpink, and possibly smudge the patches a bit, as they look a little...conform, not sure if that's the appropriate word. *shrug* She looks neat! 00:50, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll work on all those in the morning. 01:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Did you use pure black? You shouldn't have, as it messes with the lineart. Change it to a darker gray. 04:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, if you look carefully, you can just see the lineart. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 06:45, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well regardless of whether it's pure black or not, it still needs to be lightened. Also, smudge the patches a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:48, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 10:41, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did everything said. Changes are showing. 14:21, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit. 14:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

ig i can still comment here, the back left leg seems a lot darker than it should be<font color="Blue">Blue <font color="Purple">dawn <font color="#3b8ad4" style="background:none;"> With <font color="#1e6bb3" style="background:none;">Clouds <font color="#015294" style="background:none;">like Shining <font color="#003775" style="background:none;"> eyes... 15:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's supposed to be Bluedawn. 21:10, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the ear-pink too. 22:22, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to blur and smudge the patches a lot but other than that darken the ear pink and make it triangular. 22:26, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the "black" or whatever it is a little bit. I'm having trouble telling it apart from the lineart. 22:29, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define/largen the ear-pink. And make it less, hot pink-ish. <span style="">01:46 Thu Nov 24

Reuploaded Changes are showing now. 12:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the fur more or blur the black spot more. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:30, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing yet  00:43, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok now they are showing. 00:46, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, try to smudge where the black meets the white on the neck. I think you overblurred. Silver, if you have trouble trying to fix it, just ask. ;) 02:27, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry the new version is horrible. My computer needs fixed AGAIN so I'm on my dads. 13:22, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, it kind of doesn't look like it has any. 23:19, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Also enlarge the earpink. <span style="">01:13, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

I'll get to that tomorrow morning. 00:56, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This scares me >_>  18:37, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I really like this. Can you possibly blur the patches more, though? 05:39, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I'd say smudge the patches a tad more so they look like Ivy's image. <span style="">08:01 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded Yes it's smudged not blurred. 00:17, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 05:19, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

The white on the muzzle looks pure white. 21:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing yet. 21:05, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay this hasn't changed too much since you started. Make the ear pink bigger and blur it. Lighten it a little bit too. Smudge the black patches by the legs and then blur it. Do the same with the patches. If it doesn't seem too different, just keep repeating the process. 15:30, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded hateithateithateithateit >_____<  22:26, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Try to look at other pictures of cats that are tortoiseshell, like Poppycloud or even Sol. See how the patches are smudged like that? Try to blur it and then smudge it, like on DJ's charart above. (Sorry, I'm very horrible at explaining)  21:13, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I need to make it look like Cinders queen image Misty. 22:12, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Giving a slight bump. 13:36, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like I'm making myself sound impatient ._. Should I smudge it more? 23:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Silver...do not comment like that on your images. When someone finds something, they'll comment. Make the white come up past the muzzle and onto the forehead like the queen image. 20:47, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing. 22:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the spots or blur them more. 23:49, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular to make it fit more into the ear. <span style="">05:26, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Could you blur or smudge the parts where the brown and black meet? 16:17, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 23:13, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen the earpink. <span style="">22:52 Wed Dec 7

Sorry I haven't made an edit. My new computer doesn't like pixlr and I have to wait until after new years to download GIMP again. I'll try to download Gimp as soon as I can though. 22:41, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did everything said. May I please have some help with the ear pink? It's being a real pain for me ;-;  22:58, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Frostfur (Lo) ~ For Approval
2nd loner, 2nd charart, interesting! Comments? :3 <span style="">20:33 Sun Nov 27

Make the shading darker and blur it, and possibly lighten up the non shaded areas. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 21:33, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

You have white pixels on the front back paw, behind her ear, on the belly fur, on her front leg closest to us and on the tail. Sorry if I'm wrong. Dx  22:04, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. This is nice! 00:21, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, Misty, I'll try to find them, xD <span style="">00:57 Mon Nov 28

Re-uploaded Thanks Misty I found those! xD Darkened, defined and blurred zee shading. <span style="">01:18 Mon Nov 28

Maybe a little too dark. She looks sorta grey. And maybe bring the earpink forward a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 01:30, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

I hate edit conflicts *coughcough*Breeze...*coughcough* xP Define the light on the tail, add shading to the back of the haunch, and fill the lineart on her left forepaw. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:32, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Edit conflict? Where? :P I don't know what one is Dx) Re-uploaded

Forgot to sign^^) I fixed the shading, it was horrible. <span style="">02:04 Mon Nov 28

Blur the shading some more, and make the earpink mor pink. 21:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- 01:18, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur it like Leopard suggested. 06:57, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">00:15 Wed Nov 30

You made it too dark. Lighten it a bit. If you use layers, try lowering the opacity of the layer with the shading about... hmm... 5-10%. Also, try and make the highlights consistant with each other, as the face is a lot brighter then the rest of the image. 05:29, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I'm not using highlights. And I don't kno whow ot lower the opacity. <span style="">11:58 Thu Dec 1

Re-uploaded Lightened shading. <span style="">00:17 Fri Dec 2

In some places, the shading makes the pelt look gray and it doesn't stretch to the very interior edge of the lineart (as in it stops short a few pixels away from the lineart). So smooth over the shading, blur it, and smudge the shading all the way to the edge of the lineart. 00:28, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by "smooth" over the shading?

Forgot to sign ^^ <span style="">01:30 Fri Dec 2

The shading is blotchy and inconsistent, I think that's what she means. <span style="">05:52, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Re-uploaded <span style="">22:01 Fri Dec 2

Make the shading more consistent in intensity and blur it a lot. <span style="">08:08 Sun Dec 4

Smooth it out as well. It looks darker in some areas then others. 17:13, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:25 Sun Dec 4

Blur/blend the shading more 23:51, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">00:26 Tue Dec 6

Thicken and blur the shading a bunch. <span style="">04:30 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded <span style="">23:42 Tue Dec 6

The shading still looks a little bit off. Try this style, make it more consistent, and blur it. <span style="">01:29 Wed Dec 7

I did? <span style="">14:30 Wed Dec 7

Re-uploaded I'm not sure changes are showing... <span style="">22:19 Wed Dec 7

I'm withdrawing this. <span style="">00:57 Thu Dec 8

Never mind. <span style="">01:00 Thu Dec 8

Actually, I am withdrawing this. <span style="">01:30 Thu Dec 8

I just can't make up my mind, but I am for sure deciding to keep this up. <span style="">01:32 Thu Dec 8

Speckletail (Lo) ~ For Approval
Took the colors from her redone warrior image. Comments? 00:18, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Bootiful! Define the earpink, pwease. 00:24, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. 00:28, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''^-^ 00:46, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, my love. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 00:50, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the ear-pink please! <span style="">01:22 Mon Nov 28

Brighten the ear-pink and define the light on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:29, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I shall do as you say, Sky. :3 And yeah, I did everything else too. 04:08, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. This is vewy vewy noice :3 Marry me? <span style="">08:05 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded. I shall. :D  00:14, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and lighten the stripes and make a few less of them. Nice job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  08:51, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her just a tad. 12:34, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fail. 00:57, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little more 00:04, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:07, December 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * steals* This is so beautiful! Maybe smudge the stripes just a tad and blur the shading more. 15:32, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

@Sandstorm She can't smudge the stripes... it has to look like her elder image. -- 22:05, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I don't think I should blur the shading because then you would barely see it. If someone else thinks I should, though, I'll blur it. 23:57, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Anways, it looks like a stripe is visible in the earpink. Can you fix that? 14:50, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done! 16:17, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit fatter to match the elder image. <span style="">08:10 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded. 15:55, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. 23:52, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine too me. <span style="">02:02 Tue Dec 6

Beautiful Ivy! Could you define the tail stripes? They are a tad blurry. 16:20, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a bit more. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:07, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be bigger. <span style="">01:32 Wed Dec 7

And to be quite honest, they don't really match the elder image very well. They look pretty as they are, but for the sake of consistency, you should tweak them. <span style="">01:36 Wed Dec 7

Center the earpink a bit. <span style="">22:26 Wed Dec 7

Reuploaded. I redid it. I did it to match the elder image. 04:16, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (Ki)- For Approval
Here is Sol... This is my first charart! I like this a lot. Purplemoon  Christmas time!  00:38, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Um... Kit? Since when? 00:40, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

He was seen as a kit in Beyond the Code, I think. Anyway, smear the patches to match the other chararts and add shading please. 00:41, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

There's a quote on his page where he's speaking to his mom, as a kit I assume, since he supposedly hasn't seen Cinders in quite some time. 00:42, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Purtyness :3 Add or define the shading a little. 00:46, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Fallenstars, I already said that... 00:49, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the pelt color is outside the ear lineart on the tufts. Also, make them more natural. Right now it looks like spikes on his ears. 01:47, December 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Also, you need to make it transparent. 02:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks too purple. Make it more pink please. <span style="">05:56, Thu, Dec, 1, 2011

The white looks pure white. Make it a light gray please. <span style="">12:06 Thu Dec 1

Add shadings  19:23, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

I feel immensely proud XD ANyway, can you smudge the different colours a bit more. 19:29, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, there seems to be orange in the left ear where black is supposed to be. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  21:10, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I did what you said, but now it has a black background. I don't know how to fix that... Purplemoon <font color="red">Christmas time!  23:16, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Save the pile on your computer as a .png to submit it, not .gif or anything else. This will make it transparent. Also, rename the file Sol.kit.png. 23:16, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink on ---> this ear. 02:57, December 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded I enlarged the earpink. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  22:52, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

...are you going to make it transparent? Save it as Sol.kit.png. 23:00, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

It is saved as that I even clicked on it. Do you need some help Purplemoon? <span style="">23:05 Sat Dec 3

Um, yes. The blank opens up with a black background. I can't help it. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  23:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There you go, Purple. ^-^ (sorry if I messed anything up *fail*)  23:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I tried to open it up again, but it had a black background! I need to fix something but it always has a black background. Purplemoon <font color="red">We wish you a Perry Christmas...  23:23, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Snipping Tool. Most Windows computers have them. Then just make the white transparent. 23:28, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

How do you get to it? Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  23:31, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Another way to do it is, right click on the image, then click 'Save as' and save the picture to your computer. Open it up into gimp, or program you use (I'm assuming gimp since it's the only program I know that does the black BG thing) and you should be fine. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:01, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! I see that you smudged the white patch in, could you smudge it out then blur it? I would make it bigger and make it look better. 19:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you cut off the top of the ears. Fix that please? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:31, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed all of that and it opens up with a transparent background now! Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  20:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. -- 23:01, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me... Purplemoon   We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Please, darken the shading. I can't really see it. -- 21:48, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the colours thogether more. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 00:10, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon   We wish you a Perry Christmas...  12:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur the shading on his front legs and I'll CBA it. ^^ 02:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki2)- For Approval


In the allegiances for Bluestar's Prophecy, she was described as a gray she-cat with blue eyes, and, in case you couldn't tell by my username, she's my favorite character, so I snatched her up as soon as I found out she would get one for that. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad. Brighten the ear-pink and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the left ear's earpink. <span style="">00:14 Fri Dec 2

Cute! Define the shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:53, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 02:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the --> (right) side of her. <span style="">23:54, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the shading on the paws. 19:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks as if it's not in the right place on ---> this side. <span style="">21:21 Sat Dec 3

And center this ---> ear pink. And blur <--- this sides earpink a bit. <span style="">22:50 Sat Dec 3

This looks the color of her pale alt, which is still kinda blue-gray, maybe color pick from her gray leader alt? It'd look more gray probably. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 21:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen and center the ear pink. Darken and blur the shading, it looks like you have none. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is gray and define the shading. 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the gray lineart, defined the shading, and got rid of some waste i found; changes not showing. Bluestar11796 17:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found some more waste, and changes are still not showing. Bluestar11796 17:53, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading on the <-- 21:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the right ear pink. 21:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is off, I belive. If not, lighten the shading on <--- that side and blur it so it looks a little bit better. 23:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

As said above and blur the shading too 23:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color different from the pelt color, as it looks the same. <span style="">05:34, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

As said already BLUR THE SHADING TOOOOONS! Also the shading placement is off it should be on the neck and on the legs too. 14:36, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looks blotchy, but I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 16:11, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are white streaks on her face and chest. Make those gray. 16:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a bit, and blur the highlights (if any) and shading to make them blend more together. 22:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC). The whole pelt color looks blotchy and uneven, smooth it out 23:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 00:07, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can. Smooth it out. 01:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's possible to blur it. If you're using pixlr, change to something else. I know pixlr only allows you to blur so much. 03:23, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

I do use pixlr at school, but I can't use gimp right now 'cause I'm at school right now, and I can't download anything on the school computers. Bluestar11796 17:52, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Gaussian blur on pixlr. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:51, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpinks. <span style="">21:49 Thu Dec 8

Nettlesplash (KP) ~ For Approval
I figured if Honeypaw would get one, why not him? And I really don't like this one for some reason.. >.< 18:33, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot to erase some of the collar lineart near where the head meets the neck. :3 18:35, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading lots. 18:36, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Do you see how I have the neck on Honeypaw? Can you try and match that so the neck doesn't look so thick? 19:12, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

<3 dull the ear pink a tad and give the eye some depth. Also blur the highlights and shading, try to blend them together. 19:16, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, do not repeat what's already said. Moonleaf already asked her to blur the shading. Eye style is artist's choice. 19:18, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading, fixed the neck and I took the earpink off from his warrior image, but I'll dull it if anyone else agrees with Sandy. ^-^ 19:57, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

No, it shouldn't be dulled, if anything, it should be brightened. Define it a bit and make it stand out from the pelt more. Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:29, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded K, brightened the earpink. ^-^ Also, forgot to mention that there is no highlights on this one. 22:02, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink the same as his warrior image. <span style="">23:27 Sat Dec 3

I did take the earpink off his warrior image, I just brightened it... 00:49, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart by a pixel or two where you took off the collar. ~Breezewhisker~ 00:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define it a tad? <span style="">01:02 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded Is that what you meant, Breezewhisker? And I assumed that you meant the earpink, Sweet so I decided to re-do it. 14:44, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you thickened it on the chin. I meant the neck. ~Breezewhisker~ 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this? 20:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad on the hindquarters :3 20:59, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried xP  21:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch 23:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stupid haunch shading.. >.<  00:58, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad darker. 16:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I picked it directly off of the warrior charart, so I'm not changing it. 20:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you did overblur it though. Sharpen it a tad. 00:18, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but can I withdraw this? I want to reserve another charart. 02:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I'll work on it tomorrow. xD  02:58, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Decided to re-do it since I lost my layers Dx Picked the colors straight off of his warrior charart. 20:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Breezepelt (Ki) ~ For Approval
If Nightcloud gets a queen one, he gets a kit, comments? 05:44, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks prickly. I don't know if that's waste or what. 05:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading. If you used highlights, lighten them a little. ~Breezewhisker~ 05:47, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Breezepelt wasn't mentioned by name in the After Sunset play. I'm a bit iffy on whether or not he should get a kit charart. 16:46, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I disagree, Shelly. In the After Sunset play (After Sunset: We Need To Talk), it was mentioned that Crowfeather had a son. Unless you can think of any other WC son of Crowfeather's, then this should continue. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 17:07, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't use highlights. 17:27, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well lighten the whole image a bit then. It's so dark the shading is hard to see. And yes, it did mention Crowfeather's kits in the play. Also, it mentions KitS, should the be added to Crowfeather and Nightcloud's page? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:08, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Add it, Paleh. Stoney, blur the shading. 22:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:02, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks like there's something weird with the lineart. Try copying and pasting it from the blank. <span style="">02:48 Tue Dec 6

Reuploaded. Fixed that, it was waste. 02:05, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlight (Whatever you use) that's on the chest area. :) . 01:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
On page 271 of The Forgotten Warrior, Sandstorm is described as orange. Pale ginger and orange seem like two different colors to me. I may be mistaken. Anywho, comments? 17:31, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

She needs stripes. Orange = Ginger. 17:47, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:54, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit paler/define it. She was also mistakenly said to have golden eyes, so you could give her those too. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading 19:27, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 23:48, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading 23:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shading is fine, I told her to darken it. 02:00, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate this a tad. It looks more browny-ginger than ginger. I like the stripes :3 <span style="">02:46 Tue Dec 6

Make the earpink stand out more from the pelt. <span style="">05:40, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Mind giving me a color example, Wild? If I play with it now, it'll just look more brown xD And thanks :3 01:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here you go :3 Something closer to that. <span style="">01:48 Wed Dec 7

Reuploaded. I want to get this done fast. .. I'm pretty sure you know the reason why. More room for posting and redoing <3 02:15, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make it smaller. <span style="">22:28 Thu Dec 8

Reuploaded. 02:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lilykit (Ki) ~ CBA
Well....comments? 18:34, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Could you perhaps just sharpen the patches a bit? It may just be my opinion, but I think it'd look a bit better that way. 18:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

This is just preference, but could you add some black to the left (her right)? It looks kind of bare without a black patch to even it out. 19:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:46, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Why do she and Seedkit get chararts? Sorry that I didn't see the discussion, but I'm curious. 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Her description was cited from Kate's blog. =P 23:19, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the ear pink a bit. She's pretty, Atelda. 04:11, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the spots a little more 00:00, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 22:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)'''

Could you make the earpink stand out a bit more and define the shading? This is lovely! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:42, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks! 22:39, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

The epicness of this image is showing. CBA? 02:10, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Seedkit (Ki) - For Approval
Oi...I must really like kits. :P Comments~? 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Redden the ear-pink and define it in her ginger ear. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:23, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks. 19:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Beautiful Twi! Blur the places where the patches are smudged, they're too sharp. 19:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, I see waste. I'll kill it~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Killed the evil waste~! >:) 19:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! *noms* Define the shading. :3 (probably more evil waste for you to kill) 19:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate the evil waste. :P 22:09, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink the slightest bit. Make the ear pink on ---> that side a little bit smaller to make the other one. 23:14, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine to me. 01:43, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

What to change and what not to change? 02:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to change the earpink, it's fine, however could you define the shading a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - But of course. :3 21:44, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawn to reserve another charart 00:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

If this is withdrawn may I do it? 00:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may. Go reserve it 00:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the confusion, I thought we were doing apprentice images. Is it okay if I still work on it, or no? 00:40, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so back to for approval. I will bw working on this so it might take a day or two because I am going to be doing it on GIMP. Thanx for your patience. 21:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt. MC2) - CBA
Well, I tried. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:10, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing!! Could you darken or enlarge the earpink a bit? I don't see anything else wrong with this..... 01:25, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the heading a bit, if that's fine, so no one will get confused. Make the creases on her broken leg more like the ones on the original MC image. 01:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit bigger and more "into" the ear. <span style="">01:59 Tue Dec 6

Define the shading on the herbs. This is beautiful! 02:28, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you just cut and copy the lineart on the other image for consistency? This is lovely. <span style="">02:40 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded

There's waste around the herbs. 03:21, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Lighten and blur the earpink and shading. <span style="">03:55 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:01, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Should the herb be lighter? Add more depth to the shading/highlights on the herb too. <span style="">05:40, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Again, DJ, the herbs aren't shaded. There are many types of herbs that are very dark green. 15:40, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, amazing..I was always thinking if that cat in the manga isnt Spottedleaf xD Hmm can you make a shoulder hightlink a little, ehm *sorry i forget the right word* bigger? o_O 16:40, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Is your light source from the front? If so, erase the shading on the front of the legs and the front of the haunch and blur it all a bit :3 <span style="">20:21 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:30, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading please? 01:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:57, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the "highlight" extend further to the right the front leg closest to us and dull the highlights and/or lighten the shading a bit. Maybe lighten the herbs a bit. This is very pretty <3 <span style="">02:24 Thu Dec 8

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:44, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 22:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt. L2) ~ For Approval
Okay, I actually withdrew another charart for this, so I mean business. Firestar is shown on the cover of The Last Hope with a white muzzle and, if you look down, chest. He has never been described as such before so this deserves an alt. And don't give me anything about us not using book covers, because if you look up, we obviously have been if Leopardstar's up there. 04:54, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

This also deserves an alt because Firestar is typically described as a bright ginger where on the cover he is dark.

Oh my goodness, GORGEOUS! *.* Could you brighten the eyes a bit more though? They look kinda grey, but they're shown as bright green on the cover. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:15, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, on the cover of Firestar's Quest he is shown with a white muzzle and white eyes. <span style="">14:20 Wed Dec 7

No, they're green on there too..... 0.o And anyways, isn't this alt being made for The Last Hope? Not Firestar's Quest. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:56, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried to match the pattern in his eyes from the cover of The Last Hope as best I could. I also added a scar on his flank, which I forgot earlier. I would split his ear, but it's not split in the source image. 15:17, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is a little more of a preference kind of thing, but the whole pattern on his body needs to be blurred a little to get it a smoother transition between colors, but that's just kind of my preference. If others think it's fine then disregard this. This is very nice btw  22:30, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Ivy, I appreciate the compliment, but I prefer my tabbies unsmudged. It's just my style, as I've observed many tabby cats that look like this. ;) 22:41, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks lovely, Shelly. :3 But can you lighten the shading on the front leg closest to us? I also have a question.. Now that both of the new apprentice chararts are approved, will we be making them right away?? Just wondering. ^-^  02:01, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:26, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Horrible. Comments? 02:00, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading, define the haunch highlight and the one on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and brighten it. 02:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I just noticed I uploaded on meh B-Day ^^ 02:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Either darken the head shading or lighten the "highlights". <span style="">02:27 Thu Dec 8

This doesn't look very tawny... Maybe take the color from Birchfall's alt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the color from the ear pink chart, I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else has an opinion. 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. Also, Take the colors from Oakheart's alt warrior, if you're looking for tawny. This doesn't look...tawny...if you ask me. If it is, it's pale and should be darkened. 03:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did Okay I darkened it because it is tawny I took it from the ear pink chart. I would have used gausion blur, but I don't really know how to use it :P 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better, actually. Now, define the ear pink. I don't care if it's from the chart or not. I can't see it. 03:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading quite a bit. Also, just cause the color (pelt OR earpink) is from the chart, doesn't always make it right. Sometimes the colors just need to be tweaked to fit certain images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (A) ~ For Approval
Hey-hey, looks like I'm the first to submit with the new blanks! Told ya I knew where to put the shading :P I'm thinking of giving the shading a reddish tint, but I wanna hear your thoughts. All colors taken off her kit, though it was kinda difficult. I <3 this and Cherrypaw so much (those on chat should know). Comments for improvement? 02:05, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ahead and tinted it, and I made her tail much shorter since in her description it said she has a short, stumpy tail. I can put it back but honestly, I'd rather not for the sake of accuracy 03:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should put it back, since the description was probably just 'cause she was a kit and all kits have short tails. Just my two cents. <span style="">03:39 Thu Dec 8

Reuploaded  04:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? <span style="">08:01, Thu, Dec, 8, 2011

This is gonna sound weird but her pelt looks yellowish. Can you make her pelt a little oranger/gingerer. (I realize that sounds awkward, and i forgot whether her pelt color is orange or ginger so yeah) 16:50, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

All colors were taken from her kit. So if I changed them I'd have to tweak her kit as well. Just sayin'  18:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Frogleap (A) - For Approval
Yay! I got to do one of his chararts! ^^ And I knew where to put the shading before you Ivy. :P Comments? XD All colors are taken from his warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Orly? Smudge the pelt color into his ear some, it looks more natural this way. Very good ^^  02:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yusrly. And done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Molepaw (OTS) (A) - For Approval
I don't like the shading, but I didn't know the placement. And I got the earpink and nose from the kit...it looks a little neon, but that's my opinion. Comments? 02:22, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eyes and the shading :) And also, perhaps blur the connection between the cream and pelt color on the tell a tad? 02:23, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to email you the shading placement? I made one for my friend, I'll share =) 02:27, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patches look a tad red... Make them a bit more brown and lighten/make the ear-pink a tad less neon. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be great, Ivy. I'll work on the rest after my shower. 02:30, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the cream a ton. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:48, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^_^ 03:26, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Here are two versions of how you could do the shading ^^ Smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">03:42 Thu Dec 8

The cream looks greenish, unless I need to get mai eyes checked. =3 04:33, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look greenish. Please lighten the nose pink. 16:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it after teh funeral. :3 20:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oakheart (A) ~ CBA
Comments? 02:33, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Cloudeh! Define the ear-pink in this ear -->, define where the shading isn't on the back shoulder and haunch a bit more, and, this is just my opinion, but lighten him up a touch, he looks a bit dark. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:54, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more please. <span style="">08:08, Thu, Dec, 8, 2011

Since Cloudy won't be able to continue this, I'd like to take this over if that's okay. 16:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not leaving yet, you idiot. I'll still be working on this up until the day we move. 16:44, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well now I feel like a derp, thank you. Okay, please blur the highlight/dodge/whatever that is :P Fail 16:46, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

There are no highlights, and the shading's fine. I did fix the ear pink though. Re-uploaded. 16:46, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, since you're leaving and honestly there isn't anything to fix here, CBA? 17:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (A) - For Approval


Okay, so, she's in 'Chararts needing images' Under Thunderclan. For a Apprentice...wwhy, i don't know, i think it should've been in Shadowclan but okayyy. Anyway here she is! I didnt know if i shouldv'e torn her ears and give her scars or not, so i didn't and i took ALL chararts from her mc image. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The Warriors App said her apprentice name was Yellowpaw. =P Blur the shading. 03:01, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Could you make the fur spikes more consitant with the other images please? 03:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the snout needs to be shortened. 03:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the part not in shadow on her tail longer and run the length of her tail. Smudge the pelt color into the ear. Give her a light part on the dip in her back as the light would hit her there. 03:07, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and she needs a dark gray/black nose 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt.A) ~ For Approval
Ivypaw needed a silver tabby alt, it's it's in the characters needing art, I believe. Anywho, I'm shocked this wasn't snagged. xD. 04:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wrong file, Thistly! 04:16, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad, Thistle! Maybe add one more stripe to the tip of her tail? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:18, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the white belly and smudhe the pelt colour into the right (-->) ear more. I love the stripes, but I'd make this match the kit image more. <span style="">04:43 Thu Dec 8

I'll re-upload in a moment, but I just thought i'd point out that since they're alts from different pages/pictures, I don't think they need to match, since I matched the style on the face, and I also think the body stripes match the face. But, you're the Sr.Warrior, so if that's still what you think, I can change it. . 15:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't have to match the main images since it's an alt, but it's the artist's choice. There's some waste by the tail. This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  16:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo)~ For Approval
She never got a loner charart so here it is. Comments? 06:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? She had a loner charart on her page? This should be a redo, shouldn't it....? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:35, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

No she got an alt loner, never a normal one. Its because her description was confused, but the same thing happened with Minnowtail and she still got a normal kit, so sould this. 00:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I GOT VOLECLAW :D I copied all of the shading and colors from his warrior so dont be slapping me 4 that :P 13:45, December 8, 2011 (UTC) (im going to eventually set up my sig on here :P )

Blur the shading a lot and try to make it look like it's coming from one light source. Nice job, though. ^^ 14:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge where the earpink meets the gray, and the two paws farthest from us should be darker to match with the shading. 14:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLAODED, changes aren't showing :| 14:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement more like the one in the tutorial. The shading doesn't make sense right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye and smudge the pelt color into the earpink so he looks floofeh =3  18:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

And add a white pixel to the eye if it's not already there. *can't see it* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) ~ For approval
Here she is! The bluring just wasn't working with me on Pixlr. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  20:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes, blur the shading/lighting a lot, and lighten the ear pink. If you're using lighting, you may want to add a bit to the tail as well. 21:05, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  21:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Upload a new file that has the spelling correct and mark the old one for deletion. And the shading still needs to be blurred a lot more. And by adding depth I mean add a few yellow pixels in the bottom of the eye. 21:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't it artists choice for the eyes, Shelly? (sorry, have a memory block) Tone down the earpink. And if you want, you can go here to see the shading placements. ^-^ 21:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know. It was just a suggestion. 21:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Pixlr's blurring hates me. No matter how much I blur I need more. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  01:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste by her face. This still needs blurred tons more. Do you have your blur tool set on 100%? 02:48, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (A) ~ For Approval
First apprentice! :D Comments? ~Breezewhisker~ 22:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Can you lighten the shading on her back paw, it looks gray-ish. And define the shadin og the back. <span style="">22:51 Thu Dec 8

Where on the back? XD ~Breezewhisker~  22:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

On the top of the back. (I hope that makes sense!)~
 * Shading *on

Reuploaded. Better? ~Breezewhisker~ 00:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Don't forget to sign! ;) Darken the earpink. -- 00:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

To be honest, I don't find anything wrong with the earpink. Unless it absolutely ruins the image, I don't see why I need to edit it a dozen times. ~Breezewhisker~ 00:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be taken off the warrior and then you never have to change it again. 00:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I will. But I'll still have a bunch of comments telling me I didn't blur it correctly or whatever. Honestly, I don't see why the earpink is such a big deal. ~Breezewhisker~ 01:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Briarlight (Alt. A)~ For Approval
Comments? 00:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! This is amazing! Darken the shading on the lower back. 00:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awww! Love it! Darken the bit of shading on the tail. <span style="">00:53 Fri Dec 9

(Wait Iceheart, I thought you were only aloud 1 image up for approval?) <span style="">00:57 Fri Dec 9

Blanks don't count. 01:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Iceheart. I think you could bring the haunch down a bit more without it looking unnatural. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:04, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Not your Scarlet i edit conflicted eith you on this >.> But go read the discussion page on why i have two images up for approvasl. 01:06, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermjust saw Lichenfur's loner and I thought... <span style="">01:09 Fri Dec 9

Rainwhisker (alt.A) ~ For approval
Comments? 01:05, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail (A) ~ For Approval
I hope this is alright. XD I saw Iceheart has three image on the chart, so I jumped in. Comments? 01:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, we're allowed to do three now...so we can start redoing apprentices too? Great work! smudge the earpink into the ear. 01:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Define the tail shading. 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.' 02:49, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
I am very proud of this <3. :3. Comments? Elorisa  01:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

You should be. :) There is waste around the charart, and blur the tail shading. 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 01:21, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Take the black muzzle out. It was deemed a mistake and removed from his description. 01:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also, there's a lot of waste around the feet. 01:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:27, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Hmm... he was mentioned as having scars throughout his apprenticeship. Maybe add a few scars, but not as many? And not the scar over his nose, we saw him get that one. 01:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! 01:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Snowfur (A) - For Approval
Yes I can do this. Anyways, i love Snowfur, so I decided to do her. Well, comments? 01:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Specklepaw (A) - For Approval
Hmm... not pale brown enough? Anyway, comments? 02:21, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) ~ For Approval
Oakheart's is not a re-do, but a normal charart, so this is allowed. I wanted to do him before I left. I don't care who else does mine, as long as I could re-do his image. Comments? 02:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Yay Cloudy I'm happy you got him! Define the light part on his haunch and smudge the pelt into the earpink. *is really happy you got who you wanted :3*  02:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (A) ~ For Approval
I'm so proud of this! I had to fit this in fast, the more the merrier, eh? I love Swiftpaw<3 Comments? 02:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Should it not match his kit? 02:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, his kit isn't listed for a redo. Not trying to be mean, but I think we should stick with how his kit looks. Kay? :3 02:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless, his kit image should be tweaked, since it's gray and white, not black and white. xD 02:48, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blames on me for completely forgetting about the kit image XD I'll change it tomorrow. Ivy: I would never think you'd be being mean, so it's 'aight ;3 02:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Personally I think this is fine and should stay as is The kit image is all blotchy and should be redone. 02:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)