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Polly (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay so I didn't know I even had Photoshop, and then Snowed gave me the file, and I have zero idea how to get the colors so oopsies. wow that's a looooot of layers snowed how do you even keep track

idk man I just do. it must be magic. also, define the texture.

re-up changes if needed.

Stripes look thicker/more dense on kittypet, and thin out the M on the forehead a little

So, what do you want me to do about the stripe issue? keep in mind that this is a kit image, so stripes are obviously going to be thinner and smaller. Also, seeing as these blanks are in different positions. . . you get the point. Not asking for a second opinion. . . just asking Snowfall to clarify.

Know you're not asking for another opinion, but I know these blanks are a pain in the ass to match designs with, and sometimes you gotta cram tons of stripes into one place. I think it's fine.

The only reason I even mentioned the stripes was because on the kittypet there's more dark brown than light brown showing but I get that it's a small blank and a different angle. Though I still think the M should be more thin if you can make it that, and smooth out the top -> side of the M as well. Lastly, define shading depth a tad?

re-up I'm hesitant to do this, because I don't want it to be too red.

The "M" stripe on the kittypet image has a much more defined shape and is less curved, if that makes sense? Nice image. 18:42, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes should be smudged a bit.

re-up thanks

maybe smudge out the stripes a lil' more, just to give that rougher effect that the KP has

re-up

Define the shading some more. 20:02, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

The light brown spot on the haunch (I think?) near the back paw looks a little out of place, for a lack of a better word. Try smudging the shading towards that area, or just fill it with shading, since there are plenty of blanks that have shading in that specific spot. 00:24, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I hope this is what you mean?

There's waste in the area between the main body and tail. 22:23, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

re-up O.o don't know how that didn't save in gimp

could u like desaturate the shading a lil? i like tints and all but it kinda makes the right side look really, really red :) like maybe just play with the hues or smth 16:38, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

o and it should also fix the problem with shading depth which could stand to be defined a lil as well 16:38, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Snail Shell (A) ~ For Approval
I really am proud of this, hope you like it. PepperPiper11 (talk) 18:24, July 5, 2017 (UTC) This is great, Pepper. Define the shading and shading depth. 18:30, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some smaller speckles, kind of like the kit has? This is beautiful.

Smooth out the shading on the furthest hind leg? 18:41, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Purdy! Add some shading to <-- ear and define the earpink in --> ear? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 18:43, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks everyone! PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:07, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think the colors are off a little, because when I was making the warrior, Skye told me that the kit is based off Ashfur's colors

Reuploaded  I did use highlights, that might be the reason why, but I did colorpick the colors again. ^^ PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:28, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

You did a good job for your first image! Define the earpink in the -> ear. Any chance I could get a picture of the image of the image without the highlights? If the white are the highlights, then I would say tone them down a little bit. 19:47, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to match the kit's. I also suggest colorpicking from the kit, as it is the first one in the set. :) This is really good, Pepper, you've got a lot of artistic talent, considering this is your first charart. 20:11, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, as it looks like it's throwing off the coloring. The kit is the first one in this set, as Shypaw said.

Reuploaded Thanks, Shypaw! I colorpicked from the kit, and deleted the highlights. PepperPiper11 (talk) 13:46, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the spots look a little too big, and try smudging them

Reuploaded 15:40, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch a little bit? 18:48, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

SNAILS anyway you should try and soften the spots and make them more round (they look too pointy rn) to match the other images. in addition, i think there are also less spots on the other images :] 00:43, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

on his other images it looks like there are more very faint speckles throughout his pelt. maybe smooth the shading on the hind leg closest to us. 17:20, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

This can be for approval now because it meets that guideline :)

Reuploaded Thx Spooky! 00:18, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the arms, paws, shoulders, and perhaps the back leg. 20:03, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:48, July 11, 2017 (UTC)

The chest shading near the shoulder appears to be leaking away from the lineart

Add some more dapples on the legs and paws, and make the patch on the tail-tip reach the lineart. It looks like it's leaking a bit from the top. 00:27, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:53, July 15, 2017 (UTC)

Add a few more dapples to the head.

Reuploaded  20:22, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (Ki) - For Approval
Hi! This is my first charat for an actual canon cat. This is only my fourth charart ever so it's probally not so good. Also, could someone add me to the  character art project as a kit? I'm exited for feedback! Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:37, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Removed alignment. To upload click on a red link with the correct name. Click on "Choose File" and select the image from your device, it should appear on the ---> side of the screen. At the bottom of the page, click on "Upload File" and your done. :) 21:53, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks! Where you explaining to me how to allign the image? And is it good to add to to wiki page?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 22:08, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I was explaining how to upload your charart. Alignments aren't allowed, and I just told you that I removed the alignment that was there. 22:12, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart (it doesn't touch the line art in some places), define the tail and leg shading,smooth the ear pink.

Also, since this is your first charart, the header should be "For Evaluation"

Thanks! I'll be sure to do that. Where should I post the edited one, in tweaks?

Nope, you reupload it onto the same image here. Also, the file needs to be renamed to Stoneclaw.kit.png. Lastly, don't forget your signature.

Alright I fixed it. I just just uploaded on a new file. I could not figure out how to upload the charart sorry!

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:18, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

This is still named incorrectly. Define light on the legs on back paw? 23:37, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

How do you rename the image? I swer i named it correctly...

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

p.s can I be added to the project?

It takes a bit before your join request gets approved. For now on, just upload over File:Stoneclaw.kit.png. 23:41, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Alright I reuploaded the corrected image in File:Stoneclaw.kit.png is it finished?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:55, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The base color looks a tad darker than the other images, and define light on legs more. This is a nice image. :) 00:04, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I tried lighnting it up a bit, but it always looks darker on the website. I also ligntend up the leggies too. Sould I lighten him up more? The thing I'm concerened about is that it does not look really like fur. But his other sprites were like ths. How do you make it look like fur anyway?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 00:59, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the -> leg and smooth the shading on the <- leg? 01:05, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth. Usually to make it look like fur, the artist uses texture. But since his other images don't, you don't have to worry about that. 02:02, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I fixed it! I think the chest light is too bright. Is this ok? And is it blurred well enough?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 02:37, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light a little on the legs. 12:41, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I defined the light and blurred the chest a little bit. Should I efine the shadows cause the cat's other version are like that. Is it ready?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 13:42, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

maybe define the shading depth just a tad. 17:18, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I defined the shading.

Bananablue42903 (talk) 19:18, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it's too dark. Patch said the shading depth, which is where the shading is gradient, going from light to dark. :) 20:05, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth? ErmineGlow (talk) 20:09, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

What do you mean by that?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:10, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

This can be for approval now because it meets that guideline :) And eye depth means making the difference between eye colors different, so instead of it being a flat color, it's a gradient. I'd also say define the light that's on the < side of the flank and define the light on the tail tip

I added eye defination and I defined the light on the flank and the tail tip. Is it ready? Anyone?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 00:45, July 8, 2017 (UTC)

Should I upload this to the wiki? Who approves it?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 01:30, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

To answer, it's already uploaded to the wiki^ A lead of the project will come and CBA then approve it when it is ready. (and you're only technically supposed to poke everyone for comments if a full 5 days goes by, by the way). But for the image itself, define the shading depth on the front legs and smooth the chest shading out

I tried to fix it by smuding the light on the chest and I tried to define the shading on the legs. I'm not sure if I did it well. And what does CBA mean again?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 15:39, July 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs, back paw, and tail. CBA stands for 'Comments Before Approval'

The base color looks too light, the eyes look kind of grayish, and the earpink looks too dark. The shading is leaking on the tail, front legs, belly, and on the side near the back paw

Could you also lighten the shading everywhere? ErmineGlow (talk) 15:37, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

I did both of those things. I just realized... this thread is long. (I guess it's a thread?)

Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:25, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the chest? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:13, July 10, 2017 (UTC)

I tried to smooth it out. This is taking very long so should I send the gimp file to someone to help fix my mistakes. (This is my first time)

Bananablue42903 (talk) 22:12, July 11, 2017 (UTC)

If you use the burn tool to smooth it out, then I suggest using the blur tool. Set it on hard edge at rate 100, it really helps. :) 23:16, July 11, 2017 (UTC)

Thnaks that really helped! Is it good now?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 20:55, July 13, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth on the head? 16:29, July 14, 2017 (UTC)

This is turning out really nice! There appears to be leaking shading on the belly, it should be covered with shading. Also, the tail tip looks to be entirely covered in shading, try to move the shading to the --> side of the tail to match your light source?

Still working? 17:38, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Mosspaw (SC) (A) ~ For Approval
Hey y'all. I can't smudge. 19:45, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the farthest ear

Define shading, maybe? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 19:48, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ew, waste. 20:01, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's a white streak of waste in the top left corner.

Mind defining the shading a little more? 22:25, July 17, 2017 (UTC)

The patches aren't smudged right. They seemed to be more smudged in a upper right direction, and are more feathery? Sorry, i can't explaing stuff.

Reups oh, I'm horrible at explaining stuff too, star. I touched up some of the smudges. I think I got what you were saying idk? 02:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Skywatcher (W) ~ For Approval
I hope this is okay! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:02, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the shoulder area, the line where the neck shading connects to above the closest front leg. This is great 04:33, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:45, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

Hawkwing (Alt D) - For Approval
Shown as solid in HJ manga. Pretty sure this is the right blank. 17:43, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

He looks tinted blue? That may be my screen though. Smooth out the shading, and manga images don't have texture.

Reuploaded Turns out he actually was tinted blue 18:02, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

Is that a highlight on his muzzle? Can you smoothen it out? It looks sharp. Also, smooth out the shading. :) 20:24, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

It appears to be the paler muzzle he was shown with in the manga.

If he's shown as solid, shouldn't he just be solid dark gray? And why does he have a pale muzzle? 21:14, 7/18/2017

He was shown as a solid regular gray with a lighter muzzle. When I added the cite for the manga's mistake, I forgot to add the paler muzzle. I'll add it now.

because he looks like this. 21:22, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

rip me sorry 21:25, 7/18/2017

Reuploaded Like as said above, it's the paler muzzle. But I did smooth it out a little bit. 21:45, July 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the shoulder.

You mind darkening him a bit to match the color he's shown as a bit more?

Reuploaded 20:18, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Ki) - For Approval
This probably doesn't match well. 19:47, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, shading depth, and smooth the shading a bit.

Reuploaded 20:09, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It might just be me but she looks tinted yellow compared to the other images. 20:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

^^I see the yellow tint too.

Reuploaded I put a shading tint on the image. (if that's what you're talking about) Sorry, I should have said something about that. 21:14, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on her other images seem more... Clustered, for the lack of a better word. If you'd like, I can try and dig up the file for the ES. (Though my attempt at matching her pattern is pretty bad hh)

In between the thick tail stripes should be very thin, hardly noticeable stripes, i think.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better. :) And Fox, you don't have to dig the file out, you probably have so many other files and my computer doesn't load email anyway. 01:51, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the face and chest? Also, do you think you could curve the neck shading rather than having it be sort of a straight line, if that makes sense? 01:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)