Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 138

Sneezecloud (W) - Approved
I swear guys I wasn't trying to copy Berry's version but I was so in awe I couldn't resist. 23:53 Thu May 21

He's cool! but he does look like Berry's version Maybe smooth out the muzzle white, and kinda separate the tail fray and tail shading? It seems like they're right overlapping each other just to me. Nicely done Hawky!:) 07:26, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

They are overlapping...? What do you mean? 21:08 Fri May 22

i think what theyre trying to say is the shading ends right where the grey and white meet, making it look like its a block of shading instead of grey fur. 21:13, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body. 08:12, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:42 Tue May 26

CBA?

Approved.

Maplestar (Star Alt) - Approved
She was described as orange in Cloudstar's Journey, and Squirrelflight got an alt for that. I'm really happy with how this turned out. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:52, May 23, 2015 (UTC)


 * Speechless and gapes* define the shading on the main body 03:11, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :D Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:16, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

She's purdy!! Thicken the shading just a touch more on the haunch 05:52, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:58, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear a little more pinkish? User: Dewdrops56/ talk 03:00, May, 25, 2015

The earpink looks fine to me. Maybe define the head shading a tad though? Idk if what I'm seeing is the fur color/stripes. . 10:58, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Defined head shading, and made the ear pink a little pinker. Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:56, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Sleekpaw (Ki) - Approved
14:28, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Skt you've once again amazed me o.o If that's shading near the chest, blur it a tad. 13:07, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded 06:54, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

This is stunning O.O define the shading on the legs a tad, it could be my phone but it's somewhat hard to see 03:33, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's made out of gold lmao. Can you give some/define shading on the back paw to this gold nugget? 03:54, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded all that glitters is not gold its harder than you'd think to define the shading on this wow 13:30, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Lilyheart (Alt Q) - Approved
08:16, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Foxy you certainly love this blank lol  love her! Smooth out and perhaps lighten the facial shading a tad and sorta like smudge the tail markings more? It looks kinda like part of the shading and I hate explaining. I can smell randomness on my comments 09:19, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:55, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think the patches on her other alts are slightly yellower, might just be me. Maybe define the earpink a tid? Omg this is so gorgeous x.x 14:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:17, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, her other images with this pattern don't appear to be that smudged, and even then, it looks like it's only sparingly. Is there any way you could eliminate some of the smudging, because it doesn't appear to be smudged in quiiiite the same way as the others. If anything, it's really only the transition between the brown and black that appear smudged like that, and the other parts just look blurred on the edges.

Re-uploaded I tried 12:23, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Hola amigos, teneis comentarios? 08:07, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think the tail shading is a little grey - then I think we're good to go ;) 09:24, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:22, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Bluestar (Alt W) - Approved
I just stuck the deputy main body into this, and fixed up the legs and tail. 12:26, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur the tail shading just a little bit. 14:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 14:16, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 09:23, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.