Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 164

Branch (HJ) (Ki) - Approved
dont we all love it when our art programs hate us and our siblings pester us and we need food 23:15, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart, and it also needs to be named in the correct format to File:Branch (HJ).kit.png.

Donee 23:27, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

It only says "Branch.ki.png, are you missing the t? Also, define the earpink a little, I can barely see it. 23:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading as well, and add a bit more depth to it. 05:58, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaddedd  21:34, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading again please. It's still hardly noticeable. (btw I love the design you gave him!) 21:39, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink again as well; I couldn't see it on mobile or laptop very well.

Reuploaded  03:19, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink some more.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:58, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the stripes some? i'm having trouble making them out throught the shading 16:39, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

reeupploaaddeddd  04:15, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 18:07, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Please wait for at least five days before asking for comments. With activity how it is, three days isn't a good enough span of time. That being said, what's going on with the ear pink in <- ear? it looks unsmudged and like it was... idk, kinda sharpened and it seems to have these pixels at the end of the ear that look a bit off?

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't know about the rule change >.< 22:52, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 21:39, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define --> ear pink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:10, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define it some more. Maybe put it above the shading layer.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:34, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  I put it between the first and second layers 23:54, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.

Mudthorn (Star) - Approved
Too bad no one cares about him lol. 00:20, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

This is good! However, there's some waste all along the tail.

Nightslash Da Warrior of Shadowclan rar 03:27, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you, but I didn't see any waste? Perhaps I'm not seeing it. 19:15, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Have more shading along the edge of the tail? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 03:41, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reups. Expanded the shading on the tail. 04:43, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just me but the colour of the fur doesn't seem to match the warrior.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:34, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reups ...Yeah...you're right. 15:17, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

blur the earpink some more.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:42, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reups Yup yup. 01:14, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? 00:47, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.

Birdwing(Q) ~ Approved


Pretty! The shading looks paintbrushy (is that a word?)Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:38, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't quite sure what to do so I lightened the shading a few ticks and tried to smooth it out a little though it probably didn't help much

Smoothen out the shading at the top of the shoulder of the <--- leg, where it meets the side of the face. :) 23:29, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The shading on the main body still looks a little paintbrushy.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:44, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Still not sure what paintbrushy means? That's literally as much as I will smooth it out, as I can point out several other approved images with rougher shading in a similar style to this.

I don't think the shading looks paintbrushy or rough, it's good. CBA? 00:49, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.