Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 85

Curlypaw (KP) - Withdrawn
i redid the base color and ear pink to match the apprentice —  Minkclaw   19:38, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Theres waste around the left ear. 19:52, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Remove the texture, as the apprentice image that was posted before yours does not have texture.

The base on this still looks a lot darker than the other image

I color picked it from the Apprentice, so I think its alright? —  Minkclaw   20:36, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   20:42, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

The nose is empty, and there's still waste around the <--- ear, like Breeze mentioned.

Re-Upps waste removed, gray cats don't have pink noses, they have dark gray —  Minkclaw   03:08, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

the nose must match the apprentice. there's grey cats with pink noses in this series already. 23:12, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

I think the eyes must be blue 02:15, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   17:32, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking a bit on the back foot and haunch, and the nose pink should match that of the apprentice. 19:54, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten/smudge the shading.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:37, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, forgot to put this —  Minkclaw   03:53, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the nose, or something along those lines, so the bright color doesn't just jump out at you? You have a few pixels to work with, so it's possible to do.

Re-Upps fixed the brightness of the nose pink some as well as added shading —  Minkclaw   22:56, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Her apprentice image has a nose color of #DD8AA6, this one has a nose color of #7A4949 (that's the brightest color I see on the nose since it's shaded.). Just saying. 02:33, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Forgot to mention, there's also waste around the < ear. I can open up the image, take out my color-picking tool, and I would find red-pink colors.02:35, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, I've already removed the waste there's no more.. —  Minkclaw   21:17, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

There is, but it's very light. Take out your color picking tool and sweep it outside the lineart. I can still see the waste there. 01:43 November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   03:18, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. 14:13, 11/27/2016

The waste around the ear is still there; it's further out but I can still see it.

Re-Upps, since the Apprentice was declined I changed the eye color back to amber, re-added shading, also dd shading depth but its a little darker than before. —  Minkclaw   21:22, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste around all the image. 21:24, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   21:34, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is a transperant pixel--> along the very bottom of the tail. 21:39, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   21:52, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed.

i don't see it? I followed the eye thing from the Apprentice's tutorial plus I used some of the other KP as examples. —  Minkclaw   03:22, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I can move one of the eye's over a little if that's what needed? —  Minkclaw   15:03, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

That's exactly what I was going to ask you to do. Mobile doesn't allow for in-depth comments.

Re-Upps, moved the right eye over just a tad. —  Minkclaw   22:24, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there's a ... idk, but there's a part of the texture or something missing from --> eye and the surrounding area, and it seems like it was just cut out of the image.

It wasn't really missing I just seemed to have made that area darker for some odd reason —  Minkclaw   17:13, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the lighting on the hip? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:17, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

what do you mean? I think its fine? —  Minkclaw   17:08, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Imma agree with Jayie here; there's very little light on the hip. The shading there is much overblurred and could actually use some depth, as well.

Re-Upps thats all im gonna remove, I removed the most of it. —  Minkclaw   15:46, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

I think there's some shading waste in the space between the back paw and the front paw. 00:51, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   15:22, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail; the shading looks a bit flat and it seems to be all one color. there should be at least some variation due to shading and lighting.

I'll have this uploaded tomorrow after school, I've been at the hospital all weekend. —  Minkclaw   04:37, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps I don't know if this is good enough for the tail light? —  Minkclaw   16:49, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth/light on the very front -> paw? It looks a bit flat, and almost all of it looks the same shade.

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   15:45, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

There's an unfilled white pixel at the end of the tail.

,s>I just pulled it up on my prgram and there isn't a white pixel...so... —  Minkclaw   20:15, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

re-upps never mind, i found the pixel —  Minkclaw   20:17, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink I can barely see it.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:12, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Can I get a second opinion as its pretty dark as is. I can see it on all my screens. —  Minkclaw   02:37, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

I can't see it at all.

Re-Upps darkened it —  Minkclaw   05:02, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:00, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on the tail seems nearly invisible, and the only thing in regards to the ear pink that I can see looks like a darker patch of shading. Why not try making it pinker instead of darker? Also, define the shading on the legs and feet.

I lost the file to this, my computer crashed. So I'm withdrawing. —  Minkclaw   02:13, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Archiving.