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Raggedpelt (W) - For Approval
This is my first try at doing a charart, so I'm sorry if it's really bad/if I did it wrong. How is it?Hollytail 00:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, first; the lineart is really strange, it's white, it should be black. Second, you need to save it in png format, not jpg. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

How do I fix the lineart? And could that have anything to do with the fact that I had issues with getting the blank onto pixlr?Hollytail 01:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did you delete the white inside the blank before you put the brown in? And what kind of trouble did you have? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Right-click->open in new tab for the image, and then you can edit it. The images in the gallery are shrunken a bit. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 01:25, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Over the area with the blanks it says to click to get the image at full size, but whenever I tried that, it wouldn't let me place it in pixlr, or save it to pictures. It came up in a box in the center of the screen and all that it would let me do was highlight it...Eventually I just used the thumbnail picture...Hollytail 01:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, you can't do that. Copy the file name of the blank and place it into the search bar. Then, go to the page and get the location, and you're good to go! Other than that, the image looks nothing like  Møųş  ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  01:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried fixing it in the right blank this time... How does it look now?Hollytail 02:30, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Use the color dropper to get the right coat color- he is still far too dark. And his stripes don't match the leader image. Don't worry, that problem is easy to fix. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  04:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Or use the sponge tool set to saturate on size 200 will do. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail 12:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still weird...Layer a regular warrior blank on the image. The shading needs more blurring and so does the stripes. And, the ear pink needs to be lighter. Ice Spring is here! 15:45, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Tried fixing it, but what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Why did you blur the ragged fur lines? Those should be solid! ☮Quail☮ Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 15:36, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, sorry... is this better? And what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:51, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

The eye doesn't look right...look at this or this to see how it should look.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:33, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is really blurred and there is some missing on the head and paws. Also darken and blur the shading. Add another stripe to the haunch and try making it more brown like his leader image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:39, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I can say this but; it's been 5 days since you've worked on this. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:50, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

You can say it but this user still has time as we wait a week. Sakura Kiss Haikage 17:54, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Eek, Sorry! I worked on it, but I didn't realize that I didn't re-upload it. Oops... Sorry! Anyway, better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The line art still needs to be fixed and his pelt should be a darker. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:55, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

What's wrong with the line art and how do I fix it?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the picture! LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:04, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart near his back ear is missing where it connects with his head. The lineart near his hind leg and tail are smudged too. you can see brown pixels. Just past a new lineart on top of it and clean it up some if there's extra sitting outside of it.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:45, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I would highly reccomend redoing this. LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:22, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I could try to fix the lineart for you if you'd like. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 19:58, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to redo it, how does it look now?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:32, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

The lineatr is good but im not sure what the dark brown smudges in his pelt are. Is it supposed to be shading? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:42, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think they are. Blur the shading, lengthen the stripes and make them less dark like the leader image, and make the ear pink more triangular. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:14, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

The large blob of shading in the middle of his haunch needs to go away. Perhaps you might want to check one of the tutorials? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:27, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes and blur the shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:32, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to fix it, how does it look now?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to lengthen the stripes. 雨 晶須  15:27, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The colour is a little dark and there are more stripes needed in places. The ear pink is a little bright and/or needs blurring and the raggedy-fur lines look too... similar; as in they are all the same shape and size as each other. ✐Sa NdY  17:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also, he needs a torn ear (unless he got that after he became deputy?) 雨  晶須  21:20, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 01:24, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

He looks more dark ginger than brown now. Blur the stripes some. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:35, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is right. What you need to do is save his leader or deputy pic and use the eyedropper tool to get the right color because it looks like your having trouble with the color. Also, the tip of the ear facing us is gray. Erase that.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:42, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:54, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah,just blur the ear pink a little more. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:00, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:59, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be blurred more, I don't see any shading or highlights, and the haunch seems empty. Add stripes on the haunch. Quailflight 06:53, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:28, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is really bright. Make it softer, like his leader image. <font color="#99badd">Cool Blue Reason: <font color="#191970">Wrapped Around Your Throat  22:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see much shading at all, but maybe thats just me... And I agree, soften the ear pink a bit. -- Quiet !...  03:08, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:20, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 03:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more of a reddish color and blur it. Also, the nick in the ear doesn't seen realistic. I can fix it for you if you like or just ....... er it's hard to explain I would say maybe thicken the lineart around the nick? What do others say?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:57, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if the nick looks any better, but I tried to fix it. Anyways, better?

Cinderfur (E)- For Approval
My first ever elder! I know it's bad. Comments? ♥ Willow  03:08, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So how do I make it not over the limit? ♥ Willow  03:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

You have to wait until some more images are approved. The limit is 35 chararts up for approval. I bet plenty will be approved by tomorrow and you can put this up :) -- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

K thanks you're really helpful :3 BTW, I like your new siggy! ♥ Willow  03:33, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! A senior warrior, Bramble or Sandy will decline this soon-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This can stay up Willowpool as it's now under 35 ✐Sa  NdY  16:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone? I haven't got any comments yet. It's not declined, is it? ♥ Willow  20:53, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

No, it isn't. My main comment is that the shading needs blending. ✐Sa NdY  21:03, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How is it now?

A lot better! Just darken and blur the shading and try to make the ear pink less purpley. You forgot to sign :3-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:27, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Purpley? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 01:18, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Purple. Make it more pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:30, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. XP I think it's the same! (Pulls hair) <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 01:37, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone?Doesn't it look like its smudged too much? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 03:48, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

It does look a little too smudged. Blur it together more and that will fix it.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:14, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

How about I make the pelt color darker like his deputy image? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:25, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Which is better, do you think? I know I post a ton but this is my 1st charart for approval so...<font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 23:47, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I would definately say to keep the second one. Blur the shading on it, and make the ear pink more of a reddish color like his deputy image Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:16, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded. Ok. I fixed the earpink and blurred it. How's it now? By the way, what's CBA? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 19:40, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

CBA means Comments Before Approval. But only the leader, deputy, and senior warriors can use it. Which excudes me! And about Cinderfur, the lineart on the tail looks thin. You should make it look normal, and blur the shading a bit more. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  21:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How's it now? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 16:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is it declined or approved?<font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 04:10, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more and darken the tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. blurred highlights and darkened the tail. Anything else?<font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:20, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a second here. I don't think Cinderfur was ever an elder. He died a deputy. *checks* Never mind. Sorry. But how could a deputy used to be an elder? LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 07:21, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

He was never really an elder. he was elder age but had to fend for himself under Brokenstar's rule. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 18:56, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

So what should I do? <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 04:00, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights just a little, because it's too bright now. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. darkened highlights. :<font color="aquamarine" style="background:White">Sky <font color="thistle" style="background:White">wish 23:25, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks a lot better! Just blur the highlights some more and it should be perfect-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:41, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''blurred highlights although for some reason it looks darker :<font color="aquamarine" style="background:White">Sky <font color="thistle" style="background:White">wish 00:04, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Are u sure? I'd say blur it a little bit more anyway. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:02, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure you didn't bur n instead of blur because the whole image is too dark now. Lighten it so it looks more like the color of his deputy version. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 10:43, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''pelt lightened. <font color="cyan" style="background:White">Sky <font color="silver" style="background:White">wish <font color="thistle" style="background:white">♥ 22:03, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W)-For Approval


Right. So here it is,my first charart- I admit,its not perfect,is it? In fact I dont think she will be aproved. I will do a little more work on her if thats the case. So please comment and tell if Yellowfang (W) is good enough! -- Clar ris  sa! :)  08:21, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's good for a frist try :) try copying her MC image and then get the ear pink from that, and also shhe doesn't need ear pink on her back ear. Add eye color as well. Also try and make the scarrs more like they are on the MC image. And last of all, no need to put the image in a Thumb :) Shruggy talk 11:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It has to be full size, not thumbnail. That's also the (probably) the reason that the apprentice blanks show up blurry on pixlr. Click on them, then save to your computer. You might need to redo it, but maybe someone could resize it...? → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:34, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, other than that:

1.) The ear pink is far to bright. It should be a natural color- see Yellowfang

2.) The scars are unrealistic and do not match her med. cat image

3.) I don't see color in her eye. When you get the right blank, fill it in, using the tutorials for reference

4.) The shading is too concentrated, see the tutorials for different shading styles.

Other than that, waaaaaaaaaaaay better than my first failure attempt. Mo us et al on !  Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE!  11:46, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I will do that then. Thanks! And by the way,what tutorials should I use? Clar ris  sa! :)  12:00, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There are many tutorials to look at but you can look at them all to find the right style here. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  12:09, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried my best,second time round,what do you think}} -- Clar ris  sa! :)  08:10, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Remember, do not put it as a thumbnail when you put it on the page, make it full sized. I can't really see the ear pink21:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC) Mo    us    et    al    on    !!

The line art is a little blurred.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:31, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

So is it aproved? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:06, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Not quite yet. The lineart is a little blurred and needs fixing, and the shading needs blending more. ✐Sa NdY  17:24, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

To make the shading look neater and more like her medicine cat image, smudge the shading a little to give it that kind of texture. Right now it looks like a spotlight. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 21:50, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. No need to add the furry highlights I did.  Dark hallows 05:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried to blur the shading :P Does it look better? Clar ris  sa! :)  07:57, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still really blurry. Do you need help fixing it? And the eye colour doesn't look right either-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:03, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Im going to redo this.It looks really bad :P Clar  ris  sa! :)  08:38, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -any better? Clar ris  sa! :)

Add highlight to the haunch.-- Quailflight 06:54, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Right now she looks black, she needs to be lighter, like her med cat image. -- Quiet !...  03:12, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Millie (Lo) - For Approval


With four images going to be approved today, one withdrawn, and 7 not images, this will be the 35th. Not much to say other than that, I'm pretty happy on how she turned out. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:40, April 5, 2010 (UTC)I

It looks okay,but maybe you could blur it a little more? Other than that,much better than mine! Clar ris  sa! :)  14:57, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It doesn't look any different, but I blurred it as much as it will go without looking odd.-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 15:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes,its much better,I think it could be aproved now. Clar ris  sa! :)  15:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could lighten the ear pink a bit? Snickers 20  Click here! 15:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Minnow. :) All I see is just the shading could be blurred a tad more. Ice Spring is here! 15:43, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading so it's less visible. :) Fawnstorm  Never miss a beat..  16:50, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for all of your nice comments! It's good to know that after months of being away I haven't forgot anything. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 18:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Try making the stripes a bit darker and darken the ear pink a tad. Also make her tail tip gray.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:12, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

In the manga, her collar was on. Should we leave it as it is, or add a collar? Plus, the fur doesn't really match the color of all of her kittypet, warrior, and apprentice images. See Millie.-- ☮Quail☮ <font color="Maroon">Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 12:52, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I will do as Night shine said, and make two, one with and one without a collar and then put them both up. To Quail, the color can't really be helped because I used the eye dropper and these are the colors it gave me. Last I will get to this as soon as I can. It's almost ten and I still have to do my Latin homework. If I finish latin in time I will try to get it on, but I will get it up by tomorrow at the latest.-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:31, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened stripes, ear pink, noticed that I only needed one with a collar, added a collar (a bad one) anything I missed? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 22:03, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her kittypet image has a red collar. Can you make the line on the collar more stright. Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the collar color and I tried to make it as straight as I could. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:37, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Could you shade the collar? Compared to the rest of the image it looks flat and cartoony. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:46, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I personaly think every thing is good but the collar...its a little bit crooked and fat try making it more straight and more skinney....other wise i love itLionClaw132 19:24, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks great but the collar really isnt that nice,try getting it more skinny. Clar ris  sa! :)  08:41, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Why does she need a collar? The only time we ever see her as a loner is in the Lost Warrior Series, and she doesn't have a collar then (this is Nightfall, siggie is messed up at the moment)

Yeah, the designers sort of flunked that part of the manga. I agree with Nightfall; loners shouldn't have collars, in any case. When she showed up in the Clans, she didn't have one, and we tend to work more with the actual books then the manga. If you could take it out, that'd be great. -- Bram ble  00:36, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowclaw here! I am having problems with my computer so I can't get to the picture and I can't get on the computer very long so please wait until I can fix my computer.

Frostfur (Ki) - For approval
ok its my first charat ever. I know it's bad but still..... Comments? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  16:12, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but even with two discussions this is over the limit of 35. Just when I thought we had that problem sorted... Declining as I'm fed up with having to clean up the page already today. Please resubmit this when the page goes below 35 images. Thanks Snickers, and it's not just you so don't feel bad. ✐Sa NdY  16:19, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Its quite good but as Sandy said,below 35. Clar ris  sa! :)  17:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It might have changed since Sandy's comment but this is the 35th image. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So, is it ok? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  19:49, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's fine now. The background needs to be transparent, not black though. ✐Sa NdY  19:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded Better? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  20:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

wait. I have this reserved. Can't i do her? Echo Kit  21:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Echo your reservation is over two weeks old. Snickers has the right to do this image . Haikage Ash's Talk 21:23, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

oh... I was about to but her up but oh well. Echo Kit  21:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lining on the right ear is not there, and I can't see the highlights really well. What program did you use? ~Ec hos  tar  22:04, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is gaps in the line art in various places.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 22:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded crosses fingers Better?

It looks as if you're using paint to do this image. You need to use pixlr of some other image program. The shading needs to be blurred. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading more. Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  11:23, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

You are familiar with blurring, right? And some of the lineart was drawn over. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 22:53, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * It looks as if you tried to draw some of the lineart back...The ear pink needs to be blurred around the edges and this white is too bright so the shading won't show up as much and it'll make it harder. Look at her other images for reference:



To make it easier for you use the color droppler so you can take the base color from one of these images. Don't take the shading at all though and you are using pixlr right? Because it still looks as if you're using paint. If not there's always GIMP you can download :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  22:27, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I'm using pixlr. I'll work on it : ) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  22:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm on vacation and pixlr does not work. : ( I'll fix it when I go home. (which is in 2 days :) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  00:03, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded What! every time I try to change it on Pixlr it stays the same! = ( Snickers!  Meeow!  I am such a furball.  I ♥ the Warriors wiki!  22:17, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I sugust you redo it. The shading looks like you sprayed it on using Paint. You need to burn it on using the burn on pixlr. Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:20, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I'll redo it. I'll have it done soon. Silverstar

If you want, I can help you re-thicken the lineart. Otherwise, just do what everyone else said above. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:10, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Computer problems.... Getting it fixed tomorow. Right now I'm at the Library.*sigh* Sni  ck  ers  20:04, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid it so is it any better? Sni ck  ers  04:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still looks as if its painted on. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 04:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I promise by StarClan I was using pixlr Sni  ck  ers  04:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Im not saying that your not using pixlr. I'm saying that it looks like you're using the paintbrush instead of the burn tool. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 04:36, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry :S The burn was weelll kinda weird with me Sni  ck  ers  13:35, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

You seemed to have smudged part of the lineart, like near the forelegs. I can help you fix that if you want. 雨 晶須  15:26, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think looks good, but I see a bit of stuff like smuged fur and I also see you accidentally blured the tail and the chest together, making it look mixed up. But other than that, it is SO cute!

p.s. I have a cat

Graystripefan 14:48, April 22, 2010 (UTC)☞Graystripefan☜

Reuploaded Can someone remove the gray background for me because when I did that it wouldn't let me save it cause who knows why...So apart from that any better? <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  22:33, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Parts of the lineart seem to be missing. Just copying the original kit lineart, making the white parts transparent, and lining it up on a new layer over it should do the trick. (: -- Quiet !...  03:15, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Umm.. Layer? <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  19:12, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm... Whats a layer? Spri ngs  tar  20:22, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Copy and paste the lineart over this image. Make sure you delete the white pixels around it. There are lots on the kit blanks-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid her. Didn't like it before. So Commentos? Spri ngs  tar  11:54, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is...blotchy and I don't see any eye color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  13:27, April 25, 2010 (UTC)I'll Work on her  Snickers

Reuploaded Layers.. Hmmm I tried :/ Spri  ngs  tar  19:55, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

The background is gray, it needs to be transparent  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:25, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight Blank


For Briarlight's blank I am going to do a deformed warrior blank. I was wondering if I could have some help making it? Thanks. Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:43, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, of course I'll pitch in. Also, are we going to have her hind legs twisted backwards, or not? Cause she broke her backbone and can't move her hind legs. <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 14:17, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I thought her hind paws would be out behind her so it looks like she is dragging herself along. So her back legs are behind her, if you see what I mean? Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 14:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, here it is. I can't make the legs or paws look normal, though... <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 01:45, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Here is mine: -- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:16, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oooaaahhh! I like! But I think the hindlegs are too much like a teddy bears, thick and fluffy. Could you make them a bit thinner? Please? ;) <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 02:50, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I made them a bit thinner. But Fawnstorm can edit the blank the way she wants.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:01, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thank-you Night! Its ''amazing! ''I'll get to work on it right a way! Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:36, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

What about me! ):( <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 13:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yours too! For the base-line! Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 14:23, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tail she be down too. It doesn't look right to me for some reason with the legs down and the tail just sticking up. It looks funny.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  21:34, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Shimmerpool. If she cant move her legs she probably cant move her tail. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:45, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, because cat's tails are attatched to their spines Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, here she is. I made her tail thick, because she's swollen, remember? So are her hind legs, so it pretty much all fits together! <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 02:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think they meant the tail should be down, not up even more. I don't think it should be swollen either. I'm pretty sure the swelling went down by the time she earned her warrior name. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:05, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

k, what about her hindlegs then? They look swollen. I quit! ):( <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 23:27, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

No need to be throwing a fit about this now....I had this more in mind.
 * The tail could be edited if its too thick if you want. :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  00:47, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Here is the tail thinned out. I didn't add transparency because I was lazy-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:31, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Pretty good! Only thing is, perhaps leave a small gap in the line serperating her tail from her body, there should be a small indent in her leg where he foot ends, and, though this is minor and if it's too hard to do you don't have to, her front legs should be slanted a bit more outward, becuase it would be amazingly hard for her to hold hereslf up like that. I can draw you a diagram, if you want, and if the changes are too hard to make then don't worry about it; they're just suggestions. Nice job! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:00, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I put the current blank at the top of the section, and as soon as you think the blank is ready, Fawnstorm, post a message saying that the current version is fine and you've started. Then I can archive it. This is still seen as a discussion section, for those of you worried about the limit. -- Bramble 22:11, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

As Mossy said, this is pretty good, but the hind leg facing us looks kinda wierd. It all of a sudden goes down to the drooped position. Probably you'd want to make the top part more slanter, if that makes any sense. Also, the front legs are a little higher than her hind legs and tail, if you could make them more level, that would be good.

Yeah, I've seen a cat sit like they do in the warrior blanks, and the bump in the hind legs is their KNEE. I don't think Briarlight would be able to have her knees like that. Erase the hind leg bump and redo it so it looks like the back part of the hind legs. Butterfly } { Song!  19:28, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I usually only lurk, and don't participate... But due to the anatomy... The back is... weird... where the legs connect to it. If you look at a picture of a cat lying down the shape of the knee and hip changes. What your picture currently shows is a cat whose legs aren't being dragged behind... instead the knee is still folded into the sitting position with the heel and foot flopped out in a way that would indicate the leg is broken, not lifeless. Unfortunately more than just simple editing of the blank will do the trick for this one. Parts of the rear half need to be completely re-drawn, not just edited. A reference picture of a cat or dog sitting with the legs out behind would be helpful, methinks. I'll see if I can't stalk my spaniel and get something for you. <span style="color:#3665A2; background:#EBF6F9; border:1px solid #3665A2; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: #3665A2;"> Kitsufox Fox's Den 22:07, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

The paws don't look....Natural. LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 08:12, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

That'd be great, Kitsu. Nightshine, when we get some sort of reference perhaps I can finish up editing this? It needs to get off the talk page and it's needed so Briarlight can be done soon. I'm not that bad at anatomy, as long as I do it on paper first. -- Bram ble  00:11, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, was I supposed to be fixing this up? Sorry. I'll get to work once I'm back from Hawaii. But, Bramble, you can edit this if you would like.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:33, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You should add some lineart around where the red line is. Sorry if I'm being a trouble or anything. <font face="Papyrus" color="#ffcc33">Raven <font face="Papyrus" color="#ff3366">Randomness!  22:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I added what Ravenflight put above. Diagrams are really helpful to explain changes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   17:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think its fine but where the red line is,is rather strange. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:05, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think Raven meant something more like this:

Sorry I didn't make it red, it wasn't transparent so... :D Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  16:00, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the hind legs need to look bigger, because nothing is wrong with them other than the fact that they can't move, like this: ~Ec  hos  tar  22:32, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

What I meant was that limbs crease where they bend. Having lines to indicate the creasing helps make it more realistic. <font color="#99badd">Cool Blue Reason: <font color="#191970">Wrapped Around Your Throat  22:12, April 22, 2010 (UTC)



Sorry for posting yet another redline, but this is my take on it... The light gray is the current outline, then red is what seems to be correct, at least to me... -- Quiet !...  03:40, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I think I made it worse...-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:47, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Her legs look like they're clenched, but they should look limp. I think it was better before. <font color="#99badd">Cool Blue Reason: <font color="#191970">Wrapped Around Your Throat  01:51, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

can i use this for my briarlight charart? i thinck it looks goodLionClaw132 01:17, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry no. This is for Fawnstorm to use. It is made for when she puts Briarlight up for approval-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:25, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I changed it again-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:31, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

accuallly look at the reservations fawnstorm had it for more then a week96.54.70.109 02:38, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

The limit is two weeks. But that doesn't count because this blank is being made for her. Do you understand?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:56, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC)-For Approval
Here she is! Second sharpclaw! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, why am I so slow!? I really want to put my charart up! Image wise, this is good. Just blur the shading and highlights. Also, darken the earpink and make it smaller. But this is good.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:06, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Note: I am dping this while Briarlight is being worked on :) Blurred shading and made the Ear Pink darker and smaller. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:29, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading... Could you make it more noticeable??? I think you blurred it a little to much... Mo onp  elt   ۞  18:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about that Moonplet. :) I think I got over-excited. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:24, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Sakura Kiss Haikage 14:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Largened Ear Pink. Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:30, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Center it some more. Sakura Kiss Haikage 19:29, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Centered it. Sorry it took me so long, my laptop wouldn't let me upload it. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  09:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading more visiable;thefore, darken it. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:06, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, darken the shading and/or add some highlights. ✐Sa NdY  17:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:07, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was talking to Sandy and Shruugy on the IRC and they said to show what my shading normaly looks like. Here it is. Dapple star  10:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, that doesn't look too dark to me. It just needs blending. ✐Sa NdY  12:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's horrible though. :( Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  12:45, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Stormfur (Lo) - For Approval
I'll archive my withdrawn Goldenflower apprentice image later when everyone's been able to see it, so this is still within the limit. Not much to say, comments and suggestions? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  16:01, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit darker, the base seems to be more a medium grey than a dark one. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 17:12, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. The highlights look, dull, can you brighten them? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:15, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  21:05, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on his midsection looks a bit odd, as he wouldn't have a circular bump there like his shoulder. Perhaps make it a bit wider, following the shape of his body?  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 22:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make it more like the shading style that I used on Lichen, with only the two highlights? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  19:56, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if this is any better or not, but I've tried to fix the highlights... ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  22:16, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Much better, just blur them a tad more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 13:58, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It didn't blur much more... ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  21:53, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

He's shiny in a lot of places, not that there's anything wrong with that... The ears are kind of going "boing", but that's the fault of the blank... The only thing I can see wrong other than those is the fact that his muzzle shouldn't be that shiny, his jaw isn't that big... And the earpink is in a wierd sortof shape... That's it. Butterfly } { Song!  01:17, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten ear pink? <span style="color:Goldenrod;Font-family:Comic Sans MS;Background:Black;Border:2px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; Color:Goldenrod">Smoke on the water Fire in the sky☼  19:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been as active as I should have been for the past week or two, I've been really busy, but I should be able to fix the ear pink and darken the highlights on the muzzle tomorrow or in a couple of days. ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  03:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Clovertail (W) - For Approval
Here is Clovertail as a warrior, since her kits were made apprentices just before Firestar and Sandstorm left in Firestar's Quest. Comments/Criticism? -- Rain whisker  武士貓  21:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh! I likes! But the white-meets-brown place near the chest looks...awkward. <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 23:11, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's the same as her queen image:  Rain  whisker  武士貓  00:05, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, this looks good to me. The only thing I see is maybe blur the ear pink

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 01:45, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, blur and brighten the highlights, and lighten his haunch shading. It looks a little too dark. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 02:20, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and brighten the shoulder highlight so it matches the haunch hightlight. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Any better? 雨 晶須  17:39, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look awkwardly bright compared to her queen image, try darkening them some. ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  02:13, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

That would probably be due to her queen image not having highlights. Yeah, so you should either darken them like Icey said or you could get rid of them. Their not required and I don't usually use them as you can see below in Frostfur's apprentice pic. But if you want to use them, darken them.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:32, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. What else? 雨 晶須  02:33, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:14, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

There's a gap inbetween the haunch and front leg. Make it white. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  13:05, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) - For Approval


Hi everybody, I'm new, so if this fails, that's my excuse. :-D <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 22:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I un-thu

mbed it so I could see it better. I suggest looking at the tutorials for the charart--you can find a link to them on the main page. They'll tell you how to shade, highlight, and detail correctly. I myself normally use Icythroat's tutorial.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">S

<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">haf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  00:38, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I've kinda skimmed a little, but I'll look through them thouroghly. Thanks! <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 00:59, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

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Needs pupil,blur shading and spots and blur ear pink. Good job though.=) Silverstar

Can I join the project? Though I can't post much images. I'll try to post tons though.

-Sagestorm70

This is good! Just....

1.Go to take the burn tool and put it around the body,

2. Dodge tool at hardness 20 and put highlights, and;

3. Fix the eye. LucyϠ <font color="Black">in the Sky With Diamonds 05:15, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely re-did it. <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 21:07, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

If light is coming from the top (which would result in shadows on

the bottom of the image) you dont need shading there. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 19:54, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Removed upper shading, added more flecks because the back looked to plain. Also, I accidentally moved it and couldn't get it back to normal without messing up the chat area. Go me. -_- <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 01:42, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 02:19, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading more. <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 19:39, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think its fine. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:10, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur even more <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  19:14, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Does anybody have any advice for blurring in GIMP with a laptop mouse? I don't have my mouse with me. *destroys laptop mouse* <font color="#0000ff" style= "backround:red;">Leopardspot <font color="#0000FF" style="background:red;"> Where's my Fireclaw? 02:48, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) - For Approval
Spottedleaf as an apprentice. Comments? → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:26, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Her shading needs to be blurred more, and her patches aren't blurred evenly. Can you blur them evenly together? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 11:53, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Maplefern I have this reserved. Mo onp  elt   ۞  13:06, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm almost positive that Maple had this first. I checked the history of the page and she recently renewed the date. You can talk to her about it on her talk page if you really want to do this image but not here. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:25, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I've hd this reserved since March 14 and recently renewed the date. → •Maple  fern•  ←  10:35, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

There is 3 stripes on the leg that is facing us that need a whole lot of blurring. Also, the tail stripes need a lot of blurring too.-- Snowstorm   Happy  Mot  her's   Day! 22:53, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ok... I'm sorry. Otherwise the image. The color is so off from the medicine cat image and all the others are darker! So darken it. And like the others said blur the stripes. Bur npe  lt  04:23, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it....two hours ago. Fail. → •Maple  fern•  ←  18:35, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? → •Maple  fern•  ←  17:19, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The orange is a little too bright, make it more natural ginger. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 21:13, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The pelt is a bit unnaturally bright. Her medicine cat was darker, and was she actually a warrior apprentice? Butterfly } { Song!  19:18, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

She was a warrior apprentice for a bit in BP, before Goosefeather retired. <font face="Papyrus" color="#ffcc33">Raven <font face="Papyrus" color="#ff3366">Randomness!  21:29, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Her tabby stripes on her tail on her Medicine Cat picture is are brown, not black.Also her pelts needs more bluring and the pelt colour is too bright,it should be a more natural colour like her Medince Cat picture. Dawnleaf 01:03, April 24, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Can you make the orange a lighter and duller, more natural color? Also, ditto what Dawnleaf said about the tail. ~Ec hos  tar  17:23, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

When I do, it makes her look...wierd. → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:20, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Did you try desaturating her?

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is what it looked like when I desaturated her:With a little work, it will look more like her medicine cat image.-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:47, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall - For Approval
Okay, with one disscussion, and one being withdrawn, this is the 33th, or 34th. I don't know how to do math. =/ lol, anyways, construcments? (I cannot blur the shading anymore) -- Ice The stars will light your path... 21:45, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

The front paw facing us should be brown and the back paw facing us should be white. This is very good. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 21:51, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Ash! Much better than Crookedjaw. *grins* -- Ice The stars will light your path... 00:48, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really impressed with this, Ice. You've really worked on improving your technique and the image is beautiful. The only thing I see needing fixed is that highlight transition with the shading near the shoulder area needs to be blurred; you can see it's rather hard. -- Bram ble  03:15, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't the ginger have stripes?-- Dark hallows 07:13, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble. Shady, I didn't add stripes because I copied the apprentice image, and the apprentice image didn't have stripes. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:56, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

By far this is the best image you've done- in my opinion. The white on her muzzle just needs a tiny bit of blurring, however. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:25, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Mouse. Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:29, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, OK. I was going by the kit image, which shows both sides.-- Dark hallows 18:50, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything else wrong. As it's a little early, are there any other comments before the 24 hour call? -- Bram ble  19:43, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

One thing: I think the earpink is to light. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:09, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I copied it from her warrior image. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 13:55, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

You don't have to copy it. And I think you mean from her apprentice image. → •Maple  fern•  ←  14:02, April 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * fail Ice* yeah, I meant her apprentice image. Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:13, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think her pathches are too blurred. But it is still wonderful!-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  02:34, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think the patches are fine....Can I have everyone else's opinon? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:19, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

They look fine to me :) Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 20:29, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm a sickler for detail but...the ginger patch on the front foot not shown as much is suppose to be black. I got that from her apprentice and kit images. → •Maple  fern•  ←  22:17, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 13:50, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?-- Dark hallows 18:24, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ah wait. He face should be ginger.-- Dark hallows 18:26, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean? On her apprentice image, her muzzle was white and the face was black. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 18:41, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Shady is right if you're looking at her kit image. There is a ginger-brown stripe that runs down from her forehead to the tip of her nose. Just look at her kit image for reference  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:45, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:56, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make it stretch up a bit more, towards the ears  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:59, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Done. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:14, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Have the far ear white with a gray tip. Her left back paw is white. Blur the ear pink a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:09, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuplaoded. Is this better? -- Ice The stars will light your path... 18:01, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

i thinck you should make the white ear black just becuase it loooks like its blank96.54.70.109 23:52, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, the ear-tip on the ear farthest from us needs to be black (or dark gray). Blur the brown stripe on her face more, make the ear tip on the ear farthest from us black, and this should be good to go :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:53, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Done. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:57, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me :) Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:42, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Brightwhisker (L)- For Approval
Well, I really liked her in CoTC, but I was sad when she died. She was, however, leader for a time, even though she never got her name. So, comments? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   16:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I guess she was technically leader. I think there should be some white on the haunch in full view. There are also two white pixels by the tail that should be brown. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 18:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''What exactly do you mean by that, Ash? I also added shading, which I didn't do before. *face palm*  Mo    us    et    al    on    !!   23:41, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

All I meant was that there is white on her haunch on her deputy image but none here. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 01:54, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks amazing! Just do what Ash said, and shrink and darken the ear pink. 雨 晶須  15:18, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I didn't change the ear because that's how I do leader ears- it's on other leader images, and I got the color from her deputy image. Should I still change it? And I cannot believe I forgot the white on the haunch! I feel so stupid! I'm just not on it this week! Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

No, I don't think you need to darken the ear pink anymore, since you took the color from her deputy image. I think the shading on the bottom of the tail (the white part) could be darkened some, but that's about it. 雨 晶須  17:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also shorten the white on her tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   19:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'd suggest lowering the white on the leg. Quailflight 06:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think both of the white patches look fine where they are. Is there a reason they need to be moved? I'm probably just going blind, but I'm pretty sure they look fine.. -- Bram ble  02:21, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Um. . . okay, so what should I do? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   01:47, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awsome, Mouse :D The only thing I see, is blur the shading and highlights more. And, do you see the blue line on this diagram? Make the brown go up like that.

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:14, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Russetfur (W)- For Approval
Here she is finally! She is my second attempt, so please be considerate. Questions? Comments? Concerns? ~Ec hos  tar  19:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights need A LOT of blurringS N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 19:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add an earpink. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:41, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can Barely see shading Sni  ck  ers  19:58, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to blur shading and brighten the highlights. a lot. <font color="turquoise" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:23, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I agree Butterfly }  { Song!  19:13, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long, my computer was giving me problems again. Blurred it more, added more shading. I'm having trouble blurring it, I don't know why, that happened with my first attempt too. I will try to blur it more. ~Ec hos  tar  21:11, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry,but I think it needs more blurring. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:21, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs blurring too.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:28, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) Up for approval
Well, here he is! Open for comments now. Butterfly } { Song!  13:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The image is a redlink at present. ✐Sa NdY  13:48, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I KNOW. I can't open the file! I'll try again. Please wait Butterfly }  { Song!  14:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Butterfly } { Song!  14:29, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  14:49, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

In the future, don't use caps, because it's like shouting. I do see the eye color, just that the highlight in the eye seems a bit big. Also, blur the stripes and shading on the tail. -- 雨 晶須  15:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Needs eye colour! :3 Dawnleaf 14:45, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

The eye color is there, but whoever made these blanks made the highlights just as big as the eye color space. And I'm sorry, I won't use caps in the future. Butterfly } { Song!  19:05, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think he had the nick in his ear when he was an apprentice. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:22, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, he might've. Thistleclaw was a pretty tough mentor.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:29, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

As for the image, you should use a tutorial or an apprentice pic like Frostfur's for the eyes.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:26, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I still think this is good for my third attempt (I think of it as my first because it's the only one that was up for more than one day). I origionally made him with the scars on his muzzle, but painted over them because he got them later. Butterfly } { Song!  01:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

You still haven't put coloring in the eyes. He should have amber. Quailflight 16:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try to copy the eyes from another apprentice image like Shrewpaw. If not, I can do it for you.-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:35, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait. How's this? I changed the eye highlight to the eye color... Butterfly }  { Song!  14:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some eye-white. Bring up an apprentice image on your art program, and zoom ito his/her face. That should help with the eye color, pupil, and eye-white positions  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:50, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Splashheart - For Approval


Not much to say. Constructments? -- Bram ble  23:40, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be me but he looks green and his eyes look purple. Can cats have purple eyes? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 23:55, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make his eyes more orange-amber coloured. He doesn't look green to me. Blur the ear pink some more and the shading around the haunch and belly.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:57, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

To me, he looks like a really dark sea green. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 00:01, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. I see nothing else wrong with it except for then fact that he's green and his eyes are purple. And Ash, I don't think cats can have purple eyes in real life or be green unless something is wrong with them. >.>-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:38, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yes I agree with the others. He looks green and his eyes aren't supposed to be purple. Also, make the earpink bigger. But this is good.S N O W S T O R M Last one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 00:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

To me he looks like a very dark green kitty. Blur the ear shading some more! :3 Dawnleaf 13:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Yeah, he looks green. Cats eyes can be violet (Heathertail), but not purple. How did his eyes come to be purple anyway? Otherwise, the earpink could stand to be a little more visible, and the highlights make it look like there is two light sources... Butterfly }  { Song!  19:09, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ok everyone. Calm down. I think we made our point clear. No need to comment about that anymore.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:35, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Some changes are accounted for. I got his eye and pelt color from the image he was presented during Code of the Clans. I have, however, changed the eye color to a more blue tint. The pelt is not green, it's gray. There might be a touch of an olive tint, but he's a RiverClan cat any way. You never know; they could have some moss in their fur. -- Bram ble  21:15, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think it says in his article that he has amber eyes, though that may have been one of those things that was just randomly added. <font color="#99badd">Cool Blue Reason: <font color="#191970">Wrapped Around Your Throat  22:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm looking at his image right now. I don't think they're blue, they're definately a sort of amberish-golden brown. But on this image, his pelt does look a bit green to me. Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 22:35, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Amber eyes have been added. As for the pelt, there's nothing wrong with a little bit of foreign color mixed in with the gray. It's not an obvious green, nor a definite gray. Nothing is ever perfect or definite in the natural world. I've looked at it many times, and I still can't convince myself that I see any green. Is there anything else besides the pelt that needs addressing? -- Bram ble  01:53, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. Blur the ear pink a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:07, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Could you blur the shoulder highlights a smidge also? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:38, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

As for the pelt color (sorry for bringing this up again, I just wanted to reslove it) it's probably our computer screens. On my computer, he looks very green. But on my laptop, he looks perfect. So it all just depends on your screen resolution.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:47, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks very green to me, too.-- Dark hallows 06:39, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights and ear pink are taken care of; and, as a submission to popular consensus, I've desaturated the pelt some. Now it's definitely, absolutely gray. :) -- Bram ble  23:04, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can tell that the green is gone now, and it's a really nice gray, too. :) Comments before approval? ♪   Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  00:14, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Finchstar (L) For Approval
Yay :D I'm pretty proud of him! Comments?

Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 21:48, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Maybe make the white chest extend lower. -- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:18, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good. Lighten up his eyes abit! Dawnleaf 00:27, April 21, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Reuploaded: Thanks guys! Extended chest white, and lightened eyes Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 01:37, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! But I see weird pixels by the left ear... Quailflight 06:58, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I felt that the chest wasn't white enough, so I whitened it XD But I don't really understand your comment Quail, would you explain a little more? Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 20:28, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I see them too. They're above the ear. Do you want me to circle them?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:00, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: *face palm* I thought you meant there were pixels acually on the image, sorry! Okay, I got it :) Nightfall The evening star is shining bright 22:37, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  03:03, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

i think its perfect to be approvedLionClaw132 03:43, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Smallear (W) -- For Approval
This is Smallear as a warrior! Comments, Questions, Concerns?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  21:02, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the ears smaller, like his elder image. This is great, otherwise:) -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö        21:15, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. Quailflight 06:59, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Can someone help me shrink the ears?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:14, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I can help-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Tell me if you don't like it-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:32, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's good. Thank you for helping, Nightshine! -- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:37, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is good :) Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, like his elder image.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:02, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Reddened earpink. Comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth(D)- For Approval
Decided to do something different. Comments? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  22:14, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Just blur his back shading more. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 20:22, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading as much as I could. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  20:46, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks good. Clar ris  sa! :)  16:27, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch and back leg.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:37, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:22, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's only been two days, be sure to wait at least five to six says before asking for comments. As for the image, this is very good :) Just darken the stripes more on the face  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Jagged Lightning (SC) - For Approval
Finally got off my lazy butt and made him. Comments? -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 23:21, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I really like this. Just make the white tail tip a bit longer. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 10:36, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 21:44, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights on the back need blurring. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   00:51, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Done. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 01:25, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'd blur them alittle more,if its possible,also,you could blur the earpink,too. Apart from that,great! Clar ris  sa! :)  16:31, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I acually don't think that the highlights, shading, or the ear pink need blurring anymore. Maybe just blur the white transition more and this will most definately be ready :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:51, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Done. I agree with the ear needing more blurring, though. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 21:24, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  22:53, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Honeyfern (A)-For Approval
I'm back! Do you like the picture?? I used pixlr because there were layer problems with Gimp.-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  12:20, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I would add some tabby markings to her front legs, chest and also her tail, and blur the markings some more. Dawnleaf 14:42, April 22, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Well, acually there shouldn't be any stripes on her chest because there aren't any there on her warrior image. But yes, there should be some on her tail and legs. Also, darken the stripes on her forehead a bit Nightfall The evening star is shining bright

reuploaded-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  11:55, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine but blur the back a bit more. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 10:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded-- ≈Ivy -sama≈  05:43, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the legs and tail  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:48, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Near the middle of the tail (a little bit to our left of it) is a stripe that starts to go on the lineart. ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  02:05, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) for approval
he looks terribble he has some errors but i will fix them Iceyfang 21:31, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

You used the thumbnail instead of the full sized blank. Remake it using that. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 21:38, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded Iceyfang 21:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Add more shading around the body, blur it, make the ear pink more....pinkish. Blur the highlights and add more stripes. -- Ice The stars will light your path...

reuploded Iceyfang 22:14, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Blur the stripes and darken the earpink and shading and blur them.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:49, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to look more like his elder image.. -- Quiet !...  23:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Needs an eye.(As in color,pupil.) <span style="color:Red;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em color:Red">Memo <span style="color:White;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;Border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Silver">rial <span style="color:Blue;Font-family:Papyrus;Background:Black;border:3px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; color:Blue">star Remember the ones who died...  00:00, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

It's not terrible, Iceyfang! But the ear looks too fake, and smudge the stripes.-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  11:48, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded iceyfang  15:18, April 23, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Blur the ear more and blur his back. Also,why is the colour overlapping the lineart,did you blur it a little too much? Apart from this,its not terrible,its great! Clar ris  sa! :)  16:36, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 01:27, April 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The tabby stripes are too dark and the ear pink is too bright. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   01:57, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 10:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 13:38, April 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Woah...What happened to the stripes?They are too light,and I can see dark stripes under. Well apart from that really good! <span style="color:Goldenrod;Font-family:Comic Sans MS;Background:Black;Border:2px solid; -moz-border-raidus:1em; Color:Goldenrod">Smoke on the water Fire in the sky☼  19:41, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 00:25, April 25, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The stripes are too dark, copy them from his elder image. His earpink appears to be purple-pink, and I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  00:50, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

the stripes are wayyyyy to dark try making them like his elder image for instance...make his stripes 2 more shadings than his pelt colorLionClaw132 03:49, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderleg (A) - for Approval


I don't know why I love doing black cats....I've been waiting for a spot to open up so I'm glad to finally put this up. Comments?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:37, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nice :) MAke the ear pink more black. Shruggy talk 08:09, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

The current ear pink is the same as the one on his warrior image, so I think thats okay. Just don't quote me on that, though... -- Quiet !...  15:36, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I've looked at this for about 5 minutes and I can't see anything. It's lovely Shimmer =) I think the ear pink is fine as it is. (ps. nice sig Shimmer) ✐Sa  NdY  16:22, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

The underbelly could be blurred more. Quailflight 16:51, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I requested this,too. I almost finished it. :( <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:aqua">Zoe27 10:17, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Zoe but Shimmer did have this first. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 14:01, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Updated
 * 1. The colors came directly from his warrior image as I think its best to use the same colors as the first image that was created for the character
 * 2. Thank you Sandy ^^ this sig took me forever to work out right
 * 3. Underbelly blurred more using the fadeout effect as well
 * 4. Zoe I've had this up for like over a month...I've just recently renewed it so it wouldn't look so old because I had one image up for so long.

--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 02:36, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

................ok Edit I just looked at the chart and somehow Spiderleg wasn't under me anymore...I find that strange because I remember the last time I checked he was there.

Oh sugar, that may have been me when I was clearing out old reservations. I'm sorry. Zoe, Shimmer did have this first and it's my stupidity that caused this. Sorry all. ✐Sa NdY  08:25, April 25, 2010 (UTC)


 * Ah ok, thenz Sandy. Well any more comments anyone?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:31, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:47, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Jay's Wing(SC) - For Approval
My first sharpclaw! Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:34, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Make the earpink a bit more trianglar. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 20:46, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:54, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good to me :) Comments Before Approval?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Graypool(A)- For Approval
Well here she is. Her charart templete has her listed as an apprentice so I'm guessing she was in BP. Comments? Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 20:37, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the ear pink a bit and blur the shading on the haunch-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   20:41, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

She was only listed as a kit in BP, (however, she was obisiously apprenticed in that book) but she was listed as an apprentice in Secrets of the Clans. This is really good Ash! The only thing I see, is to maybe make the eyes more of a yellow color. Right now they look amberish-orang ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:42, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I took the earpink and eye color from her elder image. Should I still change them? Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 20:47, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

-face palm- my bad ;) Well, then the only thing I see is to maybe darken the shading on both the legs farthest from us

 ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:57, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should still lighten the ear pink a bit. It looks like a different colour then her elder image.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:00, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes made. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 21:09, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Owlstar (W) - For Approval
How is he? He's my third one. I'm finally starting to get used to making chararts! Comments?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:25, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  23:36, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 01:09, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the front of his haunch. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:45, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Where, exactly should I add the shading?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:51, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds - For Approval
I will say that Moonpelt's version was very good, and I'll remember to put the rank after my charart next time. I guess I didn't think I needed it since Chasing Clouds has only one known rank. Anyways, comments?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh...blur the shading on his gray parts and darken the shading on the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:46, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good....blur the gray. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) - For Approval
Bleck. 'tis terrible. Comments? Φτερ όaερ  άκι  23:34, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and shading. Add another stripe to the forehead-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:02, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reduploaded. '''I think I made it look worse... Φτερ όaερ  άκι  13:26, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (Q)-For Approval
This is one thing............. an epic fail. XP Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:32, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 00:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, and add a few to her legs  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:14, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

When I did darken the stripes, it didn't match her warrior image and messed the whole picture up. The stripes on the leg are there, you just can't see them very well because of the shading. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:09, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I still think that you should darken the stripes in the shaded area. The shading would darken the stripes. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 19:27, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened leg stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 22:15, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Dawncloud (A) - For Approval


Heres the second one for Dawncloud. (: I'm pretty sure this isn't over the limit.. -- Quiet !...  06:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

One thing..WOW! Spri ngs  tar  00:48, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the tail just a little bit, and on the front legs as well. Other than that, this is great! :) ♪   Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  03:00, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA)- For Approval
Here she is! I added a scratch under the eye. It looks better. :D Under the limit- there's a brokenstar and a mist discussion. Sorry Lionclaw, I had it reserved first. Anyway, constructments? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  14:07, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Blur the shading and center the ear pink a little.-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:14, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Centered the earpink and blurred. Stupid blurrer- weird word. Is it real? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  14:39, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) - For Approval
Since there is 4 discussions and 1 being declined this should be under the limit. Also my Chasing Clouds is going to be declined so I'll put this up. And last the sun is hitting her back so the shading is on her front. Constructments? Moon The one and only! 15:39, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image a bit and darken the ear pink. This looks awesome! Also add a few more tail stripes and darken them-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:35, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Constructments? <span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 00:53, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A) - For Approval
Ok, since there is 4 disscussions, and two being declined, I think this is under the limit. My first charart in a while. I'm pretty proud of it. Comments? Also, can ]a project lead add me to the Current Projects list? Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 16:48, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. However, the eye doesn't have any white in it. Quailflight 17:39, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 17:54, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think you made the stripes a little too big. I don't know... <span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 12:46, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorreltail (A) - For Approval
Since there are two discussions, this is technically the 35th image. Anyway, constructments? -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ          ö 19:15, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! This is awsome!!! I think you should lighten the ear pink just a tad bit! Dawnleaf 19:23, April 26, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Reuploaded - Thank you^-^ Lightened ear pink -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ        ö 19:27, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, it takes up the entire ear. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 23:36, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Temporary Deputy - Nightfall
Hey guys. Sandy and I've been talking, and due to her exams coming up, I wanted to take some pressure off of her and relieve her of her deputy position for a while. Nightfall will be taking over as temporary deputy for about three weeks; once Sandy's exams are done she'll be back. I gave her this time off to study and prepare for the eventual exams; so if you happen to catch her editing this page, give her a hard time. ;) -- Bram ble  02:48, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Bramble! I will give you a hard time, Sandy, if your reading this message ;) Congrats, Nighteh!--  Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:03, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (Ki) Up for approval
My first kit charart...soo tell me what you about it! Dawnleaf 04:57, April 27, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

This is great! Darken the stripes a bit and darken the shading.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:25, April 27, 2010 (UTC)