Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Mothflight (star) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be graying. OA is Kelpsy. 16:30, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

It shouldn't just be the muzzle unless it specifically says so, and it doesn't. It should be the entire pelt.

re-up man this day is getting worse and worse. 01:28, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up stupid waste. 01:29, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please put emphasis on the fact that she is greying. 04:35, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

now she looks like she's pale grey when she isn't. 05:39, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 05:52, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Make the muzzle gray like on the MC.

No only the muzzle should not be gray. Maybe put gray dashes through her pelt like Mumblefoot? 13:17, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

If the entire pelt should be graying, then the mc should probably be tweaked again, since as far as I can tell only the muzzle is graying on it. 18:59, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. 00:21, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always imagined graying as streaks of gray fur in the white, like hair. 00:32, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothe out the texture a bit and smudge/blur it. —   Fla      me    I can and I will  00:47, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

R-uploaded 00:54, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

it doesn't look grey, only like texture was added. 18:25, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) ~ Tweaked
OA's were Nightshine, Ive, and Breeze. She was tweaked to have a bushy tail. 21:40, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

This looks more ragged than bushy, imo. As I said on the alt, I think the tail should be more like Squirrelflight, or even Feathertail.

Use smoother lines that connect to each other more. If you want, I can redline for you? 22:23 Mon Nov 30

Yes, that would be helpful. 22:32, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

I think what you could do is make the tips less pointy, as fluffiness is intended to be rounder and more smooth, if you get what I mean? 16:32, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Here you go. I can do the other side as well, but I saw "something like Squirrelflight" and just did this. 08:34 Sat Dec 5

Withdrawing. I just don't feel like working on this. 16:05, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over 00:46, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

reups 02:16, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Try and follow Berry's guideline some more? 20:45, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

redlines are a guide, they dont have to be copied exactly. 10:55, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Lilyheart (K) - Tweaked
removed ginger. OA was Mounty. 04:01, December 5, 2015 (UTC)

can the facial shading be defined a little bit? 00:22 Tue Dec 8

Re-upped 00:41, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

She's dark, you need to darken her much much more 00:46, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

no not really she's darker than the other images and only needs to be darkened a little bit. 18:24, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes but shes specifically called a dark tabby and this does not look dark brown to me 21:08, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be darkened that much, honestly. It doesn't need to be near black in order to be dark brown.

Re-uploaded 00:37, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Twist (Ro) - Tweaked
removed extra white, OA was me. I also adjusted some of the shading to be less heavy and added ginger to the paws. 00:05, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a tad? 02:18, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA is me, tweaked to remove the ginger patches 15:31, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Same as kit. Darken this considerably please 21:09, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudstar (W) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA is me tweaked because I had too much fun with the smudge tool when I made this. (overblurred patches) 15:31, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (ES) ~ Tweaked
'Shortened', OA was me

I think you're using an older version of the blank. 18:52 Tue Dec 8

re-ups You're right. My bad

Blue Whisker (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA = me. Gosh I hate this

Branch (Lo) ~ Redone
In addition to matching Winter's stripes and colors, I added some mottles cause the star didn't have them yet. OA was Beebs, with a tweak by me.

You have some leaking shading pixels on the under/chest area. Can you also define the shading on the back half? Also do you need my file? 02:00, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I'm ok without it.

I think you might since your stripes don't match my placement. There's not that many on his flank 13:08, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Just saying but many of the "stripes" are actually mottles.

Re-uploaded I tried

Re-uploaded For the darker ears.

Re-uploaded For leaking shading.

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Re-uploaded I really tried to match the leg stripes