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Mumblefoot (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
Oh.My.Gosh.I've failed terribly at the ragged fur xD. PoppyShine (talk) 04:57, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

There are 2 flecks of waste near the chest fur. Please remove it. Also, should he have patchy fur, or not, as that's what's depicted in the other images? And there's a fleck of waste underneath the tail.~User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:30 June 26 2015

I don't think he gets ragged fur as that may be only for his elder rank. Correct me if I'm wrong. Also define the shading on the main body. Hey poppy, I was wondering if you want to, would you be willing to be my apprentice? If so let me know on my talk page, and then file out a request on the mentor program page. Storm &#9835;  05:35, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Of course ^-^. PoppyShine (talk) 05:37, June 26, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Also on the front front, facing us, there looks like there is some waste under there. Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56/talk~ 05:49 June 26 2015

Yeah I think he doesn't get the ragged fur, since he was a young warrior. 06:59, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined everywhere, not just on the main body. Also, blur the earpink. 12:04, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

The second fur tuft thing on the chest isn't coloured in. This is amazing for your first(?) charart! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:56, June 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded it.I removed the waste,blurred the earpink, and defined shading.PoppyShine (talk) 00:10, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

The ragged fur still needs to be removed...? 00:22, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Not trying to argue but, isnt ragged fur part of a cat's trait that they recieve when they are kits, take Raggedstar and Reedfeather for example. PoppyShine (talk) 00:27, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Honestly, I'm not sure we'll know for certain until GC comes out, so for now the ragged fur needs to be removed. If I'm correct in assuming the ragged fur cite was only for his elder rank. Storm &#9835;  00:42, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

Ok.PoppyShine (talk) 00:54, June 27, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Define the shading everywhere some more and smooth it out a bit? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:58, June 27, 2015 (UTC)

There is a faint patch of waste between the front leg and back leg( facing us). Please remove it. ~ User: Dewdrops56// talk~ 03:39 June 28 2015

Reuploaded it. I removed the ragged fur and defined the shading,and erased the waste. PoppyShine (talk) 00:41, June 29, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Define the shading on the two legs furthest from us. 19:45, June 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source and expand the shading. Look at some of mine for reference. if you need further help, I can send you a tutorial. 09:28, June 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hope this is better.PoppyShine (talk) 02:20, July 1, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

I still can't see your light source. Did you look at Fox's examples? If you didn't, I recommend that you do. 23:45, July 1, 2015 (UTC)

You also still appear to only be shading along the edges of the lineart. Follow the apprentice tutorials as specified 01:24, July 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink.

Ok, reuploaded it. :3 PoppyShine (talk) 06:11, July 3, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Poppy all youre doing is shading along the edges of the lineart. What you need to do is shade inside the actual blank. Please look at other examples. 11:50, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sure she is trying - I remember I had a hard time with shading placement on my first image. I would try the warrior blank redline from the apprentice tutorials, the third blank on the fifth row of redlines (not the one at the top). 14:30, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried the best I can >.< --PoppyShine (talk) 00:53, July 4, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

I'm really sorry to have to say this, but I still can't see your light source. Maybe try shading placement like him. In order to follow that light source on this image, remove the chest and muzzle shading, and add light on <--- side of each leg. Also, remove the shading on the top of the tail. The shading itself looks good, so don't be discouraged! :) 01:49, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smudge/blur the highlight a bit more? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:58, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. PoppyShine (talk) 23:46, July 5, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Better, but the placement is still off in a few places. The shading still needs to be removed on the muzzle, chest, and top of the tail. Also darken the rest of the shading. 23:38, July 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink a little more. 11:05 Tue Jul 7

You should try defining the light source more, which means which /direction/ the light is shining the cat in (beautiful). If you want him to be shone from the right|right, fill the shading like this|this(as a reference). If you want him to be shone on the left like this, fill it like this|this or to look like this|this(fill like this|this. Keep in mind that don't be afraid to expand the shading a bit, as the blur tool kinda "shrinks" it. Hope that helped :)

Reuploaded. Look closer and you may see the differences. PoppyShine (talk) 19:55, July 9, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Oops, forgot to remove shading. Here, look closely. PoppyShine (talk) 19:58, July 9, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Are you sure the changes are showing, because I can't see any. I still can't see your light source and the shading placement looks the same. Are you following the examples for shading placement? 23:06, July 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, but look closely at the shading, i darkened it and it looks more expanded. I dont know where to put the light source. PoppyShine (talk) 00:09, July 10, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

It's just basically one side without shading which is the direction light is shining from, and the shading is on the other side. Say if light is shining from the left(which means the shading is on the right)the shading should take up about 1/3-1/2 of main body, 1/4-1/3 for the head, and about 1/2 for the legs and tail. For now the legs are all in shadow while the body shading still needs to be expanded. Again hope it helped =)

Is this still being worked on?

Yes, almost got it just a few more tweaks and its done.PoppyShine (talk) 17:54, July 14, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Reuploaded. Done!

Why is the top of the head lighter than the rest of the image? Also, I still cannot see your light source. Look at Bramble's advice and the examples again, you're doing good =) 22:34, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the two legs closest, and the shading on the two legs farthest, as they do not have any shading at all on them 22:36, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also you still yet appear to only be shading along the lines of the lineart. Please look at some examples, the tutorials, or like Ice said, look at Bramble's advice. 22:39, July 14, 2015 (UTC)

You're getting better^^ I suggest, considering what's easiest for you atm, is to just remove all the shading on his back(the right side) and just fill in the legs. If you don't understand, see Graymist's shading placement for reference.

Here ya go, reuploaded. Hopefully this is better. ^-^ Did you remove the shading on the right side? If you didn't I suggest you to do so... but you're getting better and better which is always a good thing :)

Reuploaded.

It's still there as I can see... I'm starting to think that it's pixlr that did this, so maybe you should try another program and see if it works. Also, did you sign your name with " ~ "? Because if you did the timestamp should show... or did I screw up your sig 0.0

Also, are the lighter parts highlights? If so can you blur them? 01:13, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink? 01:31, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Wrong one. Here.

Looks better, but I still can't see your light source very well. The shading appears to be all around the image. It should only be on one side of the image. If you're doing a right light source stuff on the left should be shaded (ex: muzzle, chest) and if you're doing a left light source only stuff on the right (ex: top of the head, back) should be shaded. Pick a light source and erase the shading where the light would be. Just look over the examples and what Bramble said above. I hope this helped. 23:19, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

Snowtuft (DF) - CBA
Hi, my name is Iciloo and it's been a year since I did art for the project so don't yell at me. 02:00, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Erm...im not trying to yell at you in the slightest, but i cant exactly tell where your lightsource is coming from? And isnt the scar and the rip in his ear supposed to be on his other side? And i believe you may have colored the part in the mouth that's not supposed to be the mouth (i.e the triangle hole next to the tongue) sorry if im confusing you ;-; 02:07, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded:  fixed the scar and ear. for the mouth I used Tigerstar's blank as a guide so...and I don't know how you want me to fix the light source. I shaded it and I didn't use highlights so it'd be awesome if you specified what you meant. 02:23, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded: was suggested to use pure white so i did that 04:21, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

It appears somewhat that your lightsource is mainly coming from above the cat. I guess what i mean is maybe try only from the front of the cat, because the light right under the body on the tail tip is confusing 04:26, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Why would she need to change her entire source just because the light on the tail looks "confusing"? tbh, all she'd need to do is add more shading to the tail-tip to fix the problem. The source itself is just fine, barring the tail.

Define light on the legs and tail if needed :)

Mind defining the light and shading on his legs? I cant really see it. 17:58, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: defined shading and light on legs and tail and Cloudy asked me to smudge the scar so I did that 18:04, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh, I can't really make out the shape of the shading, especially in his legs. Would you please mind defining it overall? 19:07, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

I can't define it anymore than it already is. It even looks a little too sharp to me. I didn't even know we needed a shape for shading ._. 22:04, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with burnt - try adding some depth 22:11, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

Please read my above comment. 00:47, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Then add another layer of thinner shading at a lower opacity or something, Icy. I agree with Fox and Burnt that the depth should be defined a bit...

Re-uploaded: [whispering] i tried 14:30, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading a tad bit more? 22:25, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

Do you mean blur it? Or smudge it? 00:39, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blur 00:46, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Is this better? 01:33, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the stomach and legs. Yes it looks great ^_^ 04:26, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 04:56, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the depth a bit more? 10:46, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 17:04, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

I looked up the colour of cats' pawpads and lighter coloured cats typically have pink pawpads. Can you make his pawpad pink? 01:11, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Yup! Also I kinda hid the scar layer and saved it wtihout noticing...I put it back. I c  i  l  o  o 02:35, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

My cat is silver and she has black pads... but anyway, with this source shouldn't there be shading on the left side of the main body?

No? Then that would mean there would be no shading. I c  i  l  o  o 15:25, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

The light is a little hard to see on the legs and tail, mind defining it? 23:01, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

There are pink pixels on his underbelly. 23:02, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think they are his scar, Burnt? 23:04, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Yup, it's his scar! But I forgot to put it under the shading layer so I did that, and I defined the light. I think I messed it up >: I don't know...I think I need to blur it more? I might have defined it too much. I'm talking to myself. Idk man. Jet fuel can't melt steel beams. I c  i  l  o  o 00:17, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry to burst your bubble but you still have the little triangle by the tooth in the mouth next to the tongue colored in. That shouldnt be anything at all 00:01, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

I already told you, I used Tigerstar's mouth as a base. And I also used Thistleclaw's as well. So if that's an issue then those should be fixed as well. I c  i  l  o  o    00:03, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should ask jayie as shes the one who made the blanks 00:46, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Just thought I'd pop in and say that if Apple says it matches Thistleclaw, then there shouldn't be a problem because that's Jayie's image. 00:54, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

The mouth is fine. Tbh, it's really not worth arguing over- it's not even that important to the image. However, may I ask you to define the shading on the legs? This will continue CBA afterwards. 00:56, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: This is as much defined as I can get it to without it looking like it wasn't blurred at all.  I  c    i    l   o   o   01:17, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

The back leg farthest from us looks a bit odd. Shouldnt the light be on the other side of the leg with your light source? 01:36, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Erm, no, it shouldn't. It's in the right place?  I   c    i    l   o   o   01:54, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Eh it's fine tbh. Continuing CBA? 03:50, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Im really sorry but i cant make heads or tails of your lightsource. Can you please define it? I mean the light on your legs and tail dont make sense, and the shading on the back lioks out of place, like where there should be light theres just shading lines... 19:17, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I can see her lightsource just fine. Just because it's not overly defined does not mean it's not there. Burnt and I think it's fine, and I'm going to continue the CBA. Overly defined shading on white cats looks gross, or in Cloudtail's case, it looked blocky before I had to tweak it. This is a lovely image and I don't think the shading needs to be "fixed" or anything of the sort...

Stonefur (Alt. W) - CBA
Alt for being called silver. 23:55, July 15, 2015 (UTC)

He was the deputy... 00:38, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

No, he was a warrior. The cite was from Forest of Secrets, when Crookedstar was leader and Leopardfur was deputy... 00:50, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Canyou lighten the shading and define the ear pink? 14:31, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Yes. 14:45, July 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad bit more? 22:26, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I tried. This shading is a pain. 23:06, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

It's the prettiest pain ever then :o Maybe shrink the earpink a little like, make it not covering the entire ear? At least show a little bit of fur :3

You can actually have earpink that way, so Silver doesn't have to unless she wants to. 10:45, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Did what Silver asked, it looks better on my images not covering the whole ear anyway imo 13:38, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Your texture <3 QAQ CBA?

Daisy (Alt.Q 4) ~ For Approval
meh screw it, people seem to be in agreement and if its decided not to be an alt then this can be declined, or whatever (im aware of the white pixel dont comment on it) im matching jayces one which has yet to be posted, not him to me. 18:30, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

There's a black pixel on her back leg besides the white one. Please remove it. User: Dewdrops56/talk 18:34, July, 17, 2015

no. its part of the blank itself, i didnt touch the lineart. 19:53, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded for white pixel and shading tweaks 20:03, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

Does she have the scar on her muzzle? If so, shouldn't it be removed, since the cite for the scar is from The Last Hope, a the cite for being called creamy-brown is from Starlight? 20:42, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make her a tad bit lighter? Creamy brown seems it would be much lighter than this, considering her base matches light brown right now 22:23, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body? Pretty :3 00:12, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she be a tad paler and creamier?

When you google "creamy brown" I actually get cats that look this shade, hence why I picked it. If you guys tell him to change it, I'll tweak mine as well.

Eh, but if this is what creamy brown looks like, Dawnstar looks way to light. I actually think she should be tweaked

I didn't say all creamy brown cats needed to be that color. I googled, saw a few, and went with that. That does not mean Dawnstar needs to be tweaked.

idk she looks like living chocolate milk, which looks.....creamy i guess 09:04, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Eh okay... You forgot to smooth out the shading on the main body by Storm

i didnt say i wouldnt reupload? just poiting out the colour 09:14, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

This is creamy brown. 13:35, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

And there's likely numerous shades of creamy brown. That specific shade is Latte or whatever; there's probably a specific shade of creamy brown that matches this. Stop trying to make every single image perfect down to the very last damn pixel. You're being extremely annoyingly picky now, and it's getting on my nerves as well as the nerves of other users. This shade is fine. 13:46 Sat Jul 18

Just saying, if you google creamy brown, you get shades that are the same color as this, it's fine. 13:54, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded i didnt even pick the colour  19:27, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the main body shading just a tad more? This is very pretty. 22:59, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded its probbaly not gonna get much smoother than this considering how i do my shading 21:52, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add more shading behind the belly on the back leg? With this light source there should be some there 00:50, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

re uploaded 13:15, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe define the tail shading? Now that's a pretty kitty! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:59, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt Lo) - CBA
Quite proud of this.

Define shading on the main body, shoulder and haunch?

Re-uploaded.

Would you mind defining the eye depth? Gorgeous, as always. 10:44, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the head shading? 14:18, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 00:59, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Stonetooth (BP) (W) ~ For Approval
Well this took me forever and a half to get the stripes correct. 22:50, July 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the head? Very nice! 00:37, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Could you also define the shading on the forelegs? 01:17, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reups also dulled the stripes a bit more, as I saw on his deputy image they were dulled a bit 22:01, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes on his deputy image are slightly thicker than what you have... and I also think they might be blurred very very slightly. The placement itself matches wonderfully- nice job matching it. ^^

Reed (K) ~ For Approval
Kicsi Nád ^^ 15:12, July 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on his tail a tiny bit. I c  i  l  o  o    00:46, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 10:32, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (DF Alt2) ~ For Approval
making charart on a laptop is not really my thing apparently. 03:42, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define le Shading? 11:44, July 20, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes a bit- they're not as blurred on his alt warrior.

Can you lighten the shading on the legs?  I  c    i    l   o   o   03:12, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yes 03:36, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading- I'm having trouble seeing it, especially on the main part of the body (like the stomach, side of the cat, ect).

Can you sharpen the stripes more?  I   c    i    l   o   o   15:54, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Hailstar (Warrior) - For Approval
does anyone remember when i did his kit version back as my first image lmfao 02:44, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blue the shading on his paws. This is beautiful, Burnt!  I  c    i    l  <span style title="9/11 was perpetrated by our own government to justify the evasion of Iraq"> o  <span style title="Where was bush during 9/11?"> o   03:11, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you! 03:57, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define the shape of the ear pink. I'm having trouble seeing it.

Re-uploaded I tried. 12:41, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the paw shading. <span style title="Bush did 9/11"> I   c    i    l  <span style title="9/11 was perpetrated by our own government to justify the evasion of Iraq"> o  <span style title="Where was bush during 9/11?"> o   15:55, July 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think its fine 19:19, July 21, 2015 (UTC)