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Dodge (Ro)~ For Approval
My first charart. Comments? If the picture isnt showing, its here. ~Fallen 23:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nice for your first charart. ^^ Blur the body shading a bit and slightly define the stripes. 11:22, 11, 04, 2012

Define the stripes they are hard to see 12:18, April 11,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stripes defined and shading blurred more. Thanks, DJ :3 --~Fallen 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This is pretty for a first. Define the earpink at the tips? 22:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image has a yellow-green hue. Fix that? 23:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look yellow-green to me ._. 15:41 Thu Apr 12

I think it just looks yellow... Tone down the highlights(?) a bit. 00:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ear pink. I did`nt use any layers, so I darkened the main color. --~Fallen 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 01:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading, since I didnt have highlights, and blurred earpink a bit more. --~Fallen 03:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose a little bit. It looks a little neon to me :P 17:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think if you darken or make the base color less yellowish, this could be just about 80% done, in my opinion. 03:18, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Well, I don't know much about this but it's been over a week since Fallen's last upload, so I decided to take over. Comments? 04:48, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

According to my clock, it hasn't been over a week...A few more hours. 05:01, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wiki time for me is 5:02 05:07, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's been over a week, so this can stay. Lighten the earpink a bit to make it look less hot pinkish, there's waste under his belly, and I see a slash on his chest and his front leg farthest away from us, is that supposed to be there? And tone down the highlights a tad. 15:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think that slash thing maybe part of the stripes. Can you define the shading a little more? 15:53 Sat Apr 21

There is some waste in between the back left thigh and the under belly, Looks great! :3 -- 20:36, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the striping pattern. I might need to blur it some though :/ 15:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please do. They're too sharp-edged, imho.

Define the shading ;3 20:06, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a lot. And it looks like they're on top of the highlights. Darken and define the shading as well. 19:00, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. If you're using layers I would suggest putting the shading layer on top of the stripes layer. o3o 20:21, 23, 04, 2012  20:21, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know there's a lot of waste Dx please cdoment on something other than that, and I know the eyes and ears are missing too... I'll reupload soon this afternoon. 13:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's supposed to be named like Dodge.rogue.png So, basically, get rid of the extra .png =3 13:34, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but those don't look like stripes....try looking at the tutorials for stripe ideas.

Tons of waste around the art. Color in the eye and the nose. Add earpink. 00:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I know there is waste, and I specifically asked if you would not comment on that since I stated I already knew about it and would be cleaning it up. 03:59, April 25, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded That's better. I'll get the earpink and waste later 12:55, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's white specks on the tail, and the whole thing looks a little green. 16:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

define the earpink c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:05, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but after discussing with another SM, we've agreed that this isn't 80% complete. You have a week to get this 80% done or it will be declined. Also, there's waste around the image, blurred lineart, and the stripes are triangle tabby stripes. Please fix that. 00:38, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the shading some. 00:21, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? 05:20, 30, 04, 2012

Yes 05:25, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reupload it then. 12:29, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Been practicing "Mountain tabbies" on my parents' computer, so hopefully this'll at least look decent. I looked at a picture of a real cat when I made this. 14:53, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks mottled, please fix that. And I can't quite tell through the "mottles" but it doesn't look that much like a tabby right now.... it may after you get rid of them, I don't know. 15:02, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll change it if someone agrees with you, because it doesn't really look like mottles to me. 19:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't, per se, but I think it's the grey underneath. He's just a brown tabby, so let's keep him that way, 'kay? There's also waste all around. 19:34, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks gray cause of the highlights. I'll fix it c: 19:46, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the stripes look like lines, and a bit mottled, I agree with Paleh. Please fix that. 00:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit too. 11:16, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry; 'reuploaded trying a new pattern since the last one didn't look much like stripes... I'll revert if you disagree but I think this one's better. 12:59, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

waste around the image c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  13:11, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 19:52, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Evil waste around the image. Kill it? 21:52, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Gr. Vile, vile waste. Killed it... I hopes. reuploaded 22:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's still some waste. Much better Ivy. :D 06:03, 05, 05, 2012

Still looks mottled... 08:30, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks DJ! :) 12:40, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. 13:08, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

define the stripes near the tailtip. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  15:25, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:49, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste all around. 15:51, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

It's still really dark. Try lightening the base coat. 23:45 Sun May 6

There's smears of light brown everywhere on the base pelt. 08:01, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm having trouble telling the stripes apart. They look mottled. Please, change it. >.>

Define the highlights.-- Spottedstar42 The WWi ki van dals Mu st fall!!!   05:54, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Bluestar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
She was decipted as a gray she cat with thin fur in Secrets of The Clans. Comments? 03:46, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular and blur it a lot. Darken and define the shading as well.

Reuploaded Toned down earpink 03:53, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

If it's thin fur, shouldn't it be shorthaired? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  04:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I would think so...

You need to have a cite for this description in the trivia on Bluestar's page before you can make this. And there must be no question as to whether or not the cat in the image is Bluestar. In any case, if memory serves, most of the images in that book were grayscale anyway, and most didn't have captions explaining which cat was which. Declining unless you can provide the citation. 04:41, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it wasn't a picture. Snowfur said something about her sister having thin gray fur in that story about Mosskit. Secrets of the clans, Page 77. No pictures, it specifically said she had thin gray fur. 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

And I put a cite on the page before I made this. 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

The cite was verified before she even had the image reserved. I checked myself. Changing heading back to "For Approval", since it was talking about Bluefur, and it had nothing to do with a picture.

Blur the earpink, and make it less orange/reddish. 19:59, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:31, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still blur the earpink. 10:20, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:35, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Nice Ivy 08:12, 23, 04, 2012

I don't know if it's just me but it seems that where the shading meets the highlights it looks blotchy. Blur it a bit please, unless anyone disagrees. 02:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I dunno if it's my browser, but it seems fine to me. 22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it does look a bit blotchy to me too. Skt ANZAC day  23:00, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Mossy like. X3 Blur the shading. 00:30, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

It seems fine to me as well, however I would encourage you to blur and lighten the earpink. 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think that we decided that Bluestar and all other bluish-gray cats wouldn't get alts. for being described as gray because blue is the scientific word for gray. Look at the talk page. 17:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Though it's looking like the plain gray alts will be declined, yes, it's not decided yet Bluestar. 20:51, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this?-- 21:49, April 29, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Yes I am, thank you very much. Reuploaded 23:00, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and enlarge the haunch and shoulder highlights. 23:34, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more gray. 07:39, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:48, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Just take a blur tool and blur the earpink...it's really hard-edged right now. 22:06, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:08, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

You blurred some of the ear lineart instead of the earpink.... :S 22:19, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded that all? 03:34, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

blur the highlight on her chest. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  13:07, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, enlarge the flank highlight, and straighten out the ear-pink. 22:37, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? 18:56, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:37, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Boulder was shown as a solid light gray tom on pg. 76 of The Rise of Scourge. Comments for improvement? 13:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink and enlarge the earpink as well. Also rename this  13:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploded Also, why don't you rename it. I don't know how. 13:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Because she's not an admin. It's not that difficult. Go into whatever program you use, choose "Save AS", and name it "Boulder.warrior.alt.png" and when you upload it to the Wiki, it will be named that. 13:50, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Sort of) just renamed the file with a new image. 13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. 14:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smooth it out so it's not so blotchy. 18:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes might not be showing. 19:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink more. 20:21, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. 02:21, 21, 04, 2012

Also blur the earpink. 20:55, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. It might be just me, but it looks like they're rectangle-y. Spark Love me some chocolate~! ♥ 22:02, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really hate blurring. 16:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. 20:23, 23, 04, 2012 20:23, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading? c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:53, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still really hate blurring. 19:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

You may not like blurring, but blur the shading more. :3 00:33, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 02:36, 25, 04, 2012

Reuploaded I can't blur the shading or highlights anymore. 18:12, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks a little blotchy. Blur it more if you can, or redo it. 20:46, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a little as well. 07:46, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink more. 08:19, 26, 04, 2012

Reuploaded 17:20, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:06, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it bigger.-- 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the shading, its really hard to see. 23:58, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 16:55, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Center, enlarge and make the earpink more triangular. Define the haunch highlight, and there is some waste between the legs. 19:24, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, make it more triangular, and make it more pink instead of dark purple. 21:51, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. 16:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the face "highlight" 20:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the highlights. 10:08, 02, 05, 2012


 * And blur the earpink's edges. 10:12, 02, 05, 2012

Center the earpink a bit more too. 00:48, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the haunch and stomach highlights.

Reuploaded 14:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Again. Forgot to center earpink and the head highlight seemed too light. 15:08, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define it.
 * What I mean is make the shading easier to see, like by darkening it, but blur the edges of it so it's not so blotchy.

Hmm, Just a suggestion, but how I make shading easier, I make a new layer, I use paintbrush or pencil, I draw the shading in pure white and full opacity and then blur it, and then set the layers opacity to whatever level looks best, and it makes it easier to work with. -- 23:19, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  13:09, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't want to seem rude or anything, but this has been up for two weeks? Shouldn't this be declined? 19:54, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Silver I think that's only for tweaks..I think original art on the approval page gets a month..I think. And make the highlights bigger, and less blotchy. I suggest the shading placement on the tutorial. 00:42, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, original art gets a month. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  00:46, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

I read it wrong, so I tried to edit it back to me not even posting that at all but it didn't so through. Can you possibly move the earpink so it doesn't look sideways? 13:10, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:16, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:46, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bigger.  Berry Gradients, gradients... 05:52, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a little bit too. 22:53, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading a tad -- jack  never let go, loonie ❤ 23:01, May 7, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded 23:34, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons. 00:30, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink, it looks too sharp-edged.-- Spotz Gray stripe FT W!!!   06:01, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:21, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more. 20:11, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the face shading and blur the rest of the shading to make it less blotchy. 00:21, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Antpelt (Ro) ~ For Approval
Since we are redoing the Dark Forest cats as rogues, I chose Antpelt. Any comments for improvements? 11:04, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

sharpen the scars and thin them out a little bit -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:59, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  Berry Gradients, gradients...  14:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yay! Antpelt is awesome x3 Blur the tail shading and define the scars. 21:36, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  10:03, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading, and I think the sideways scars should extend down the back more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt ANZAC day  10:06, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did what Trolly told me to do. XD   <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...   11:07, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

He needs more horizontal scars. 01:52, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  13:25, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:07, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lightened shading <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 08:53, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. <span style="">03:42, 28, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Defined the shading. <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 05:15, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly/haunch shading. 17:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the belly/hunch shading <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 08:24, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'm actually going to CBA this one. :3 <span style="">04:59, 30, 04, 2012

Sorry but the two patches of scars are too close and they need blurred some. 00:39, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 06:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink if any. <span style="">10:06, 02, 05, 2012

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 11:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

What happened to his black ear? 11:14, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the shading on his paws, it looks like he has darker paws owo -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:42, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a black ear, define the nose color and desatuare and define the earpink. 17:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar, please don't repeat things that have already been said. Blur the shading. 19:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bluestar, I am keeping the earpink because it came from his Warrior image. <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 07:03, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink from his warrior isn't as neon. Change it, please.

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 09:23, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some. <span style="">10:57, 04, 05, 2012

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 06:24, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

He still needs more scars, and the ones coming down should be longer. 16:12, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his flank and haunch. -- Jack  never let go, loonie ❤  17:07, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Grr...I swear the blur tool hates me  <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  08:12, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading 00:33, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploased <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 06:49, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Uploased XDDD Define the flank-ish scars. :3 <span style="">09:53, 08, 05, 2012

Re-iploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 12:13, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add two more chest scars. 22:02, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

He already has three chest scars. The position of the blank makes them a little less visible than the rest. <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 12:21, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

The one going across his arm doesn't make much sense... You should remove it. 18:55, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 09:16, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

The changes, they aren't showing e3e. |They be here :3 <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 10:49, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

That link is broken. But if you haven't already fixed it, there's a whole lot of waste around his chest area. 22:08, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (W. Alt4) - For Approval
Dang, she has about as many alts as Daisy :P Alright, I have my reasons for this. For one, I believe that she has been described as a dark tortoiseshell, and a dark tortoiseshell and a pale tortoiseshell are two totally different pelt colors. A pale, or dilute, tortie consists of blue, cream, and white hairs, while dark torties are black and dark ginger or even brown. Secondly, when I was reading, it said something along the lines of "he could see her pale fur crouching in the undergrowth", meaning that her fur must have been pretty light to stand out against the shadows. She gets this alt, in my eyes. I feel that I should probably either lighten the shading or the fur effect some and define some of the dapples on her cream patches, you guys agree? 00:36, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Um... blur the earpink. I'm speechless, this it beautiful. 00:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink, it looks too neon. 01:05, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure whether it'd be a pale tortie or just a pale solid color, as it's only mentioned pale. But whichever it is, she'd get an alt of some kind. Lighten the gray a tad. Lovely job~ 01:42, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erm... that other image is just a tortie and white, otherwise known as a pale tortie... saturated blue as a photograph (as in the entire photo is saturated blue, it has gray fur, not blue)... and Tawnypelt already has a tortie and white alt... And maybe the passage in the book was describing her lighter patches of brown fur? I'm sorry, the image is lovely, but she already has an alt for this. I believe it should be declined, unless someone can convince me otherwise. -- 01:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

In any case, we don't have a cite for Tawnypelt being a dark tortie. And she's been described and depicted as pale enough times that I'm lobbying to change her to a tortie and white. 02:03, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

The dark tortie picture you showed looks kinda like a brindled tortoiseshell to me :/ just throwing that out there... 21:16, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Scratch that. Can you define the shading a little more? 21:18, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. 23:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Just beautiful. Maybe blur the earpink not where you smudge the pelt up but by the sides. This is so awesome, I nearly died of awesomeness. X3 03:16, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok I'm not sure what's gonna happen with this but until it's declined I'm gonna keep working on this. And yeah the picture was of a brindled tortoiseshell, it still gives a color example lol  05:31, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possilby blur/blend the patches into the pelt a lot? the patches are very blurred and blended, and to look realistic, wouldn't this need to be too? Sincerely: ChanCharm 05:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

They're fine. 07:42, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

This hasn't been commented on in two days x.x I think that pale should be added to her description and that this should be her main image o3o 00:08 Wed May 9

Yeah since we agreed her images should be redone this should be added to her page, unless you guys want me to reserve it and put it on the tweak page, which I see no point in doing. Sorry just checking up on my images  02:15, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Mounty. This should be her main image, and since Ivy's already done such a wonderful join, I say it should just be moved over to the tweak page.

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
As in After the Flood. Comments? 21:51, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:52, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it too. 21:52, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink and make it more triangular. 22:25, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge/blur where the white meats the gray a tiny bit. <span style="">03:31, 06, 05, 2012

Darken the shading.

Still working on this? 18:54, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah sorry I'll reupload asap. 21:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Finally :) 23:24, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular and define it, and define the tail shading. <span style="">08:58, 10, 05, 2012

Berrynose (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Being mentioned with a long tail is far from being normal. This warrants an alt because tails do not grow back on cats, and Longtail got one for when his eyes got clawed out, and I do believe Berrynose has alts for this already...but I think they're when he was a kit. I know it's darker now; I'm lightening it and fixing that.

Re-uploaded. Eww.

Blur the shading. 00:22, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

It might be my computer, but I think there's waste near the torn ear. 00:25, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Paleh is a lifesaver. <3

Blur the shoulder shading~ 00:45, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

If I blur it, you're not going to be able to see it. o.o

* must have been looking at the old version* It's fine now ^^" Darken the shading a tiny bit? :3 02:41, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur the midriff-ish shading. It seems to be darker than the rest of the shading. But that could easily just be my computer. :/ <span style="">08:48, 10, 05, 2012

I can't blur the shading. If I do, there's going to be no way you can see it.

Sharpclaw (Alt D2) - For Approval
Yay for furry solids! 01:48, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lessen the furry effect so he looks less mottled? :3 02:44, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make him long-haired? Just a suggestion. 14:52, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hi! Just an outsider suggestion. Since PCA can't have solid gingers, I suggest switching this to grey-scale. 15:43, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar, since his normal images are shortfurred, I think this should be like that as well. ^^;

Ok, it was just a suggestion because he kinda looks long-haired in the manga. 16:56, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly, because it never says he's ginger, but you don't have to. I also agree with Bluestar, but again you don't have to because it is never confirmed and it could just be perspective, I could try finding a picture of him so you can choose. :) 22:08, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Here. Scroll to page 17 for a good picture. Hope this helps. 22:18, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Erm...he's not even mottled. He's a solid colored ginger cat drawn this way because the artist doesn't realize all gingers need stripes. It is a long-furred effect drawn on his back, nothing more. If he were meant to be mottled, he'd be mottled in all of his art anyway. Sorry but this should be declined and I should really stop commenting on stuff and leave like I'm supposed to  00:23, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well, no, not declined. He's cited in the books as a tabby, so being shown as a solid is grounds for an alt. But since he's ginger, this will have to be grey, or it'd have to be striped and then it'd be too close to his current charart. 00:42, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Can't remember if he was shown with a lighter or darker muzzle... 01:22, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a liiitle bit. 19:48, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I disagree. Any more and it'd be too blurred. 21:59, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle(Ro) ~ For Approval
Here he is! I know there is waste. And, about the stripes, I wasn't sure how to do them .I blurred them and smudged them a bit. So, could somone help me if possible, Thanks! 21:56, May 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Rename this Tangle.rogue.png and make the background transparent. Blur the ear-pink, too. 22:00, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's a lot of waste from the stripes. Select the transparent part on the lineart layer, then go to the stripes layer and hit delete. 22:01, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Is it me, or are the stripes //above// the lineart? o.o

Sorry guys! I know it looks terrible. I will redo it. My mom shut down my computer this morning and I lost the .pxd file.-- 22:06, May 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine