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Pipsqueak (GC) - For Approval
Pipsqueak the pirate. ouo

I think the shading is leaking on the <--- forearm where the white meets the black belly fluff? I love this pattern! 19:38, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I got it?

Maybe define the shading on the tail a bit more. Did you get the pipsqueak the pirate from mop? Lol. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:11, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You mean MLP? Dang right I did. Pipsqueak is one of my favorite side characters, so when I saw they used the name in Warriors, I couldn't resist seeing if I could get his image.

Define the face shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:50, December 6, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Not entirely sure on this but I think the shading on the head and the tail would be on the opposite side. The light there seems to be hitting in <- direction while everywhere else it looks likes it hitting from -> direction. 01:10, December 10, 2017 (UTC)

idk man, having a 100% correct source was never a requirement of PCA. As long as it looks 3D, then it's perfectly acceptable and meets the standards. Not sure why everyone is so nitpicjy with shading lately... Plus, I've tried a few different ways of shading this and this is the only one that doesn't seem flat.

if anything the only shading that would need to be changed (and thats a maybe lol) is the --> front leg to the other side. 23:15, December 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That I'll attempt to do. Not entirely sure it looks any better.

Fierce (GC) ~ For Approval
Easy-to-match pattern? Never heard of it. Also I apologize for the gross shading here, will fix it later.

She doesn't look like a tortoiseshell. She looks more like a brown cat with orange flecks. Also, it didn't say Fierce was missing a leg, only that one was shorter. 00:30, 12/02/2017

I think if you add some black in there, it should be ok. also if you just make the paw lineart more visible on the shorter leg, that should solve the problem. ^^ 01:04, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Between the start of the tail and then under her missing foreleg, connect the hind leg to make it appear and not have the tail be directly next to it without showing the hind leg where it sits. (If this doesn't make sense I can do a redline) C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:07, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Yeah, Cosmo can you give me a redline?

Could you add another toe to the shorter foreleg? On the normal blank that leg has four toes, not three. 16:44, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Maybe define the shading a little bit? 22:50, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shorter leg's paw should droop a little more, since it's just hanging there

re-up May fix that paw later.

there's a pixel of tail lineart leaking onto the altered leg, plus can u thicken the altered lineart like just a tiny bit? i love this

Sorry for the late comment, but like I redlined where what I said earlier. https://ibb.co/cwpkzb C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 05:23, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define shading on the tail? --ErmineGlow (talk) 22:16, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up This what you meant Cosmo? (also thanks Danny ^^)

Kind of, but the one you did is going through the tail, lol. I tried redlining it better. https://ibb.co/b62ecw C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:02, December 7, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Better?

Thicken the lineart for that hind leg. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 18:19, December 8, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Too thick?

Define the shading depth on the tail just a little. 15:30, December 11, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, define the overall depth just a little bit as well.

Can you define the lineart on the --> hind paw? It's hard to make out. 23:08, 12/12/2017

the paw lineart on the shorter leg also looks a bit bit compared to the paw of the regular leg. 06:27, December 13, 2017 (UTC)

Marigold (GC) ~ For Approval
it's been forever. i might've named this wrong idk 04:40, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth and the eye depth

Expand the shading a lot, and add some shading to the ears. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:17, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded 21:31, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit

Expand the chest shading. 01:59, December 4, 2017 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the face and muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 05:25, December 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading on the hip especially. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:37, December 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded 05:26, December 8, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some shading to the left shoulder, and smooth it out a bit on the chest and hindleg. 17:59, December 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you lighten the visibility of the shading by a few ticks and define the shading depth a little bit? It looks really dark to me. 01:29, December 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded 05:05, December 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere? 11:14, December 13, 2017 (UTC)

Needletail (W) ~ For Approval
She was mistakenly called a warrior,, so,, my bby Needletail,, <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:50, December 9, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Changed the shading color and edited the white chest. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:11, December 10, 2017 (UTC)

Is the shading leaking on the back leg further from us? <span style="">00:22, 12/10/2017

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 23:12, December 11, 2017 (UTC)

Hm, I don't think the white on her chest should be quite that big. I know when I made the apprentice, I didn't mean for it to be that large.. could you shrink that just a little bit?

Maybe define the texture a little bit? It seems denser on the apprentice. <span style="">00:26 Wed Dec 13

Nectarpaw (K) - CBA
15:25, December 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on front legs. ErmineGlow (talk) 18:04, December 9, 2017 (UTC)

I think it's visible enough. The shading just needs to be smoothed overall. <span style="">00:21, 12/10/2017

Could you define the shading on the chest? 01:11, December 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:49, December 10, 2017 (UTC)

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Cinnamon (GC) - For Approval
It's been a while. 01:39, December 10, 2017 (UTC)

Is it possible to increase the white on the paws just a tiny bit? I can barely make them out, especially on the front two. The back one on --> side is fine, however.

Tigerstar (AVoS) (GC) ~ For Approval
17:36, December 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe soften the darker eye depth? The edges look really rough, and it just appears strange. God I hope I don't sound nitpicky. <span style="">19:35, 12/12/2017

reuploaded 06:19, December 13, 2017 (UTC)

Fidgetpaw (KP) - For Approval
Why do I hate shading black and white so much. <span style="">19:20 Tue Dec 12

Expand the black on <--- of the face. Would he wear a collar? We don't know for sure Though.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 19:31, December 12, 2017 (UTC)

Unless he was specified without wearing a collar while staying with Twolegs, I think it's okay. <span style="">19:34, 12/12/2017

I've been told in the past that other than kits, they get collars unless stated otherwise. <span style="">19:37 Tue Dec 12

Okay, so this is probably just me, but can you prehaps make the pattern on the collar blend? The colors seem abruptly cut off, and it kinda bugs me. <span style="">19:51, 12/12/2017

Reuploaded All of my collars are like this but okay lol. <span style="">00:24 Wed Dec 13

Again Forgot the black on the face lol <span style="">00:29 Wed Dec 13

can u define the shading on the front leg 06:24, December 13, 2017 (UTC)