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Willowpelt (K) ~ For Approval
This looks horrible I know 09:25, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the face a bit, and there's leaking shading along the face, foreleg, and haunch. 02:02, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:59, December 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail. Also, the shading is leaking on the haunch and I think the face as well (I'm not sure if the light between the shading and lineart on the face is intentional, but I don't think it should be there anyway given your source). 14:42, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pink seems to be fading on <—— side of the ear. I’m not sure if you did that on purpose but it seems like it just doesn’t fit right with the image--​​​​​​ 16:15, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

its a stylist kinda thing, ear fur doesn't have to fill the entire lineart, and adding to Ivy's comment, the depth could definitely be defined as well 17:34, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Similar with the warrior, the eye color needs to match the set. This looks a little too dark right now. -- 17:39, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I referenced the eyes from the StarClan file btw 06:31, December 27, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the jaw and hind leg. 00:20, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:28, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still leaking in the areas Patch mentioned. -- 23:35, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

I can provide a red line if you need one. 18:51, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, please! 22:05, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

here are the spots I was talking about, hope this helps^^ 17:32, December 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 09:23, January 1, 2020 (UTC)

There's still shading leaking in the areas Patch mentioned. Add some more shading along the lower jaw, behind the ear closest to us, and the back heel/haunch area peeking out from behind. 00:22, January 2, 2020 (UTC)

I probably won't get this done. I'd like to withdraw. 09:48, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

I'll take over. 02:54, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:45, January 7, 2020 (UTC)'''

Smooth out that edge of shading on the haunch closest to the rump, please. ​​​

'''reuploaded. 15:35, January 7, 2020 (UTC)'''

Remove some shading on top of the front paw and define the light on the tail a bit. 22:56, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:34, January 10, 2020 (UTC)'''

Willowpelt (W) - For Approval
I tried out some bounce light so let's see how this goes.. the shading also does not want to co-op with me. -- 20:35, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 20:37, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 20:45, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

can you maybe move the white on the left eye a bit? With it centered in the pupil its making the pupils in each eye look different sizes. And add some light to the chin.

Reuploaded Changes are not showing for me; just in case check the file history for the updated image. -- 21:35, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading just a bit more? 05:17, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

I think the shading could most be smoothened out on the chest. Also, there appears to be leaking shading on the top of the shoulder by the lineart. 16:50, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

That's bounce light, Egg. -- 16:53, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

Bounce light should be going down the whole length of the back then, not just the shoulder. There would also be a bit of a bounce light on the tail too.

Reuploaded Shading. Pain. Much. -- 00:10, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure if this is supposed to be there but the shading seems to disappear on <—— side (by the spine/back)--​​​​​ 01:03, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

It's bounce light, Oceanpelt. It's intentional, and I was told to add more (hence why I reupped a while ago). -- 01:21, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

It should be a more uniform line, at the moment it looks quite patchy which is why it looks like leading shading. It should be one very soft line on the edge of the shading ( I normally have my base shading layer cover the area, and then have my depth layer create the bounce light).

Oh, what’s bounce light?—​​​ 06:15, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded So I tried doing that, and the shading became even more gross than it already was. I have removed the bounce light, and now I'm much happier with the image. As for your question, Ocean, bounce light is where light shines on a place where there is shading. The shading "bounces" off the light, giving the illusion light is bouncing off the image. Some users use it as a way of gaining more depth for their images. -- 23:54, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

(Sorry for this comment, but I want to clear up what a bounce light is, and this in no way pertains to the image in question.)

Sorry, Potato but that's not entirely what a bounce light is - a bounce light essentially another light is bounced off a reflective surface onto the subject to achieve a softer lighting effect. It's generally used in photography, but, can be used in art to achieve a better sense of a 3D object - seen here or here. It doesn't just appear where there is shading, but, because it is more light that is where it becomes more noticeable. The shading doesn't bounce the light at all, in this situation the ground would be a much more applicable reflective surface.

Just wanted to comment this to avoid misinformation being spread, as bounce lighting can be considered an advanced technique as it can easily appear as leaking shading when incorrectly used.

Can you remove some of the shading on the >> ear? Just a touch; seems heavy on shadow for this source

Reuploaded -- 21:06, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Wasptail (W) ~ For Evaluation
The stripes aren't the most matching and best I know, but I like it. I'll tweak them better after advice. 10:36, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Waste 10:39, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you add some shading depth! They're very pretty!! 19:23, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Given your light source, flip the shading on the top of the tail to the bottom of the tail. And perhaps recede the shading on the chin and muzzle? The stripes should also be more jagged to match the apprentice. Whoops didnt see you already commented on that 20:07, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

The stripes should be thinner and sharper, more jagged like Egg said. Overall, I think what Thunder had originally matches better in terms of stripe style if you want to reference that ^^ 21:27, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you give the stripes a bit of a more "fuzzy" look to match the set? I think using a rough/fuzzy brush and continually smudging back and forth will help to achieve that. -- 23:44, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

I don't seem to have the brush in my paint program. Maybe I could just smudge the stripes? (I use Medibang paint pro) 01:56, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

If you don't have a fuzzy brush, try smudging with a 1px brush back and forth. -- 01:59, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up I hope they're fuzzier 23:41, January 8, 2020 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the face? 21:26, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. It's looking good! 21:39, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up Thanks! 23:32, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

https://vvcap.com/BU9i3RstJ here's a redline for shading that's leaking, to fix it, just use your paintbrush/pencil tool (whatever one you use) and fill it in so all the pixels are filled up to the line art. https://vvcap.com/DDz3migeT here's another reline where shading needs to be added/defined, i didn't redline the face, but could you define the shading depth there too? with the placement you're using, there shouldn't be shading on the back of the tail like you have it right now. you're doing a great job on this! 17:03, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Re-up  09:43, January 12, 2020 (UTC)

Owlstar (SotC) (W) - For Approval
Them eyes. -- 00:28, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

If possible, could you adjust how you have the pupils? They seem a wee bit out of place and slightly off-putting. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded -- 01:47, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Could you round out the eyes a little more? They look rather squarish, when the sides could be brought out a little more to give them shape.

Are the eyes meant to look usual? 09:12, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Yep! He has eyes that are wide like an owl. -- 13:55, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded For Max's comment. -- 01:31, January 10, 2020 (UTC)

Sorry, I should've clarrifed where I meant for the eyes; it was more the bottom that looked very squarish - here's a redline for what I meant.

Reuploaded -- 21:07, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Deceased brown rogue she-cat (R) - For Approval
A deceased rogue Thunderstar and Lightning Tail find in Thunderstar's Echo. -- 02:56, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us? The little section at the top of the leg probably wouldn't stretch that far out to show the difference between belly and leg.

Reuploaded -- 21:08, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Black and white Kittypet (KP) - CBA
Hello everyone, this is my old family cat, Junior. Let me know if I need to remove the white belly since "white front" is pretty vague lol 03:58, January 9, 2020 (UTC)

CBA? ​

Shellfur (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
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