Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

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=Tweaking=

Mothflight (star) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be graying. OA is Kelpsy. 16:30, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

It shouldn't just be the muzzle unless it specifically says so, and it doesn't. It should be the entire pelt.

re-up man this day is getting worse and worse. 01:28, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up stupid waste. 01:29, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please put emphasis on the fact that she is greying. 04:35, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

now she looks like she's pale grey when she isn't. 05:39, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 05:52, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Make the muzzle gray like on the MC.

No only the muzzle should not be gray. Maybe put gray dashes through her pelt like Mumblefoot? 13:17, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

If the entire pelt should be graying, then the mc should probably be tweaked again, since as far as I can tell only the muzzle is graying on it. 18:59, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. 00:21, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I always imagined graying as streaks of gray fur in the white, like hair. 00:32, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothe out the texture a bit and smudge/blur it. —   Fla      me    I can and I will  00:47, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

R-uploaded 00:54, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

it doesn't look grey, only like texture was added. 18:25, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped' 00:25, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

Why dont we just have faint gray streaks/points on her? Not distinct as a marking, but moreso like a lilac siamese. Just a thought, considering it appears to be difficult to make her seem graying through texture. 00:46, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

for example, Mumblefoot? He has noticeable graying on his backside. I know it's somewhat difficult on a white cat, but there are texture styles made by artists that match this graying style. 03:00 Fri Dec 11

Re-uploaded 06:25, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

She still doens't look graying, she just looks pure white. Can you put more emphasis that she is graying?

Re-uploaded 03:33, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

define the grey some more. 18:01, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Twist (Ro) - Tweaked
removed extra white, OA was me. I also adjusted some of the shading to be less heavy and added ginger to the paws. 00:05, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a tad? 02:18, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

it looks fine. it wasn't nominated for it and i think its at a good darkness. 11:06, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

Just because it's not nominated for it, doesn't mean it doesn't need to be done. I honestly cannot see a lick of shading on this.

Or at least define the depth? 02:03, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

All I did was lighten the fourth layer for clarifying depth, as it was stark purple before. I don't think I can darken it much further without it looking odd, and I already added highlights to make the contrast more bold. 23:40, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

You shouldn't have adjusted the shading in the first place without asking someone. 23:43, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

If the majority say to fix the shading, fix it. I can only just spot it along the back, that's it. 21:21, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Morningflower (A) - Redone
Svaing PCA from the disaster I created (looks back) wait no i didn't this failed OA is iceheart yea colors don't match i will tweak them DONT COMMENT 03:36, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the face shading. I can't really tell if there's supposed to be shading on the face or if they're markings. 13:50 Thu Dec 17

Could you also define the shading on the haunch, if possible?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  14:01, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Rosetail (Star) ~ Tweaked
06:10, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
06:10, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make her look more brown on the main body? She was nominated to be brown and right now she still looks reddish. 07:35, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

she was nominated for her tail, not the brown. 08:38, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

As far as I'm aware, it was community consensus that she would be made brown as a part of the discussion. Corresponding to that, I honestly think you should make her brown, even though it wasn't on the nomination. 08:40, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

she is brown? she doesnt look reddish at all on either of my computers or phone. I'm not changing it unless it's agreed on here. 11:45, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

This wasn't even tweaked the slightest from its original rose color, from what I can see- and quite frankly, this is rose colored, this isn't plain brown, and as far as I'm aware, tabbies are only default to be plain brown, not red-brown. Please at least make an attempt to tweak this into a less reddish color or if anything, a tint away from its old color. 12:49, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

The color looks brown on my laptop, Burnt. Please chill out a bit, as you're coming off quite hostile. He has a legitimate reason for waiting to tweak the coloring, as... it really didn't quite look rosy-colored to begin with, imo. The tail was the part that was nominated, not the color.

I don't see how i am being hostile, and quite frankly I am bringing this out very calmly: sure, it wasn't nominated for a tweak for being brown, but the discussion that the nomination was based on clearly concluded on the fact that Rosetail could've been tweaked for a brown main body and the other parts that aren't her tail. Nobody had a problem with the old color- and I don't protest with it being tweaked right now. The old color may have not been rose-colored enough, but it frankly still looks very red in comparison to plain brown. Again, a tabby is default to plain brown and plain brown only. I see no harm in attempting to tweak this into a less reddish brown, quite frankly, what's so hard about tweaking it? This was rose colored, is rose colored and is not plain brown. 13:19, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

And honestly, why were these posted before the nomination is archived? This is almost like reserving a new image after 24 hours passed. It is still open to community opinions and posting this is honestly just seems like rushing the image. Even if its not a written rule, this shouldn't be any different from the approval page, as it says above that all guidelines remain the same. 13:27, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

and like I've said, I'm not touching it until a majority agrees, as it looks perfectly brown to me. there's no default shade I'm required to match quite frankly.

and bring it up on the talkpage if it bothers you so much, or I dunno? actually do what a sw is supposed to do and archive it? I don't appreciate getting bitched at because I'm not willling to change the colour so willingly. 13:45, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

As far as my observations tell me, all of Rosetail's images lean slightly towards a pale, reddish-pink color. I can see why people would think this looks plain brown, but to me, this looks like a pale version of Pinestar. I don't think it would hurt to alter her colors a little bit so they lean more towards a neutral shade of brown.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  14:05, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

I colourpicked, and the colours I got were all around a05c3b. That's nowhere near pink. 17:47, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I think the tail looks red-orange, not orange-pink. 21:18, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

The whole image itself looks pinkish orange. The tail looks ginger. Can you please listen to what Burnt is trying to tell you and change the color please???? It wont kill you Skt. The whole images itself needs to be plain brown and the way the tail was before was perfectly fine. If i remember correctly, this was put up on the tweak nomination for only having her tail be pinkish orange, not keep her main pelt color pinkish orange and make her tail orange 03:33, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

Lilyheart (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Scarletwind, tweaked to remove the ginger parts.

There appears to be an odd patch of light brown on her cheek, where I don't think it's supposed to be.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  14:06, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better?