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Halftail (Alt. W) - Declined
Here's Halftail without his tail.. comments? 15:04, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

The tail is straight and unnatural. Maybe add a curve to it 18:00, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

I just cut off the warrior tail, I think it looks fine. 22:16, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image and make the stripes on his face more noticeable. 23:35, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

maybe lighten the haunch*Wildfire* 23:37, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the head shading, and center the ear pink. 23:45, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like the style on his other images-- 23:59, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Moonleaf, the tail doesn't look right. When you see the full thing on the normal warrior blank it has a curve at the top which keeps it from looking too unnatural, but on here, it looks like his tail is a stick. Also, the colours and stripe style on this image don't match his other ones. 17:31, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Moonleaf and Mosspool as well. The tail looks to straight. Adding a curve in it would make it look much better. 00:43, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

There's no need to repeat what they just said. :P Brighten the highlights a tad, Oblivion. :) -- 00:46, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried... the tail still looks odd. 03:49, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Add more Y stripes and try to make it more consistent to his elder image. 03:55, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the tail, add more face stripes, move the ear pink down a bit and blur it, make the shoulder highlight and haunch highlight bigger and blur them, darken the haunch and neck shading. -- 04:12, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks a lot better, oblivion. The tail could use a touch of light, though. 22:14, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno. To me, the tail looks crumpled and withered like it was crushed rather than bitten. Maybe don't curl it so much and make it a tad thicker? I can also see some gray speckle near the second stripe on the tail from the base, can you fix that? Scarlet wind Medicine Cat of SolarClan 00:25, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 11:22, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image some. 23:54, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:53, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a tad. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:22, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome. Just add some more stripes to the back. 03:09, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Change the shade of brown to match Halftail's elder image and use a thin brush and draw on y tabby stripes for consistency. 04:12, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mossy, I'm using the shade of brown from his warrior image. The stripes on that image are all in the same spots as in mine, I think it's pretty consistent. 15:28, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the midriff shading, blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch-- night  shine  ❄ 19:16, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a small splotch of gray right below the tip of the tail. Fix that please. 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:54, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the tail stripes, blur the ear pink and make it a bit more pink, blur the shoulder highlight, darken the neck shading-- night  shine  ❄ 23:57, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's very consistent. . . I guess the colour is fine (even if his elder image colour seems barfier to me), but even if they are in the same spots, the stripes on his elder image look totally different than the ones on here. 03:47, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's consistent to Halftail's warrior image. 04:44, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

It looks nothing like his elder image. 22:00, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay guys, calm down. I agree, Oblivion, you've made the colour and everything match his image, and the stripes look sort of like his elder image, but the elder image's stripes are a tiny bit thinner and are more Y-tabby-ish. Now personally, I prefer the image as it is, but seeing as this is more of a consistency issue rather than a vanity issue... Anyway, you don't need to redo the image or anything, but add another line to some of the stripes and make them a tiny bit thinner. Not a huge thing, just a little tweak. It looks gorgeous, btw. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:36, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, Wildheart, we werent' fighting. :P But it should stay as is, if it should be consistent to either the elder or warrior image, it would have to be the warrior image. 15:35, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I decided to cut it off before it escalated to such XD Ignore pretty much all I said. Silly me only looked at the elder image. **facepalm** --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 20:42, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Umm okay, but then I guess we should change the elder image when tweak week comes. 20:55, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the very bottom of the haunch. Looks good. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:00, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the front of the front leg or get rid of the shading at the top of the front leg. It looks weird how theres shading and then like a highlight on the leg. 00:10, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, was Halftail ever seen as a warrior with half a tail? As for the image, I would say make the ear pink consistent with his other images. 00:30, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hi-lites, they look kinda flat. Mist fire I'd like fries with that 02:25, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this Oblivion? 20:17, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work-- Night  shine  20:49, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (L)- Declined
Well, I figured he would get a leader picture, since he led the ancient clan. 03:05, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. There's been a discussion about whether Furled Bracken would get a Leader/Healer charart already. Unless that's reopened, this will be declined. Sorry. Scarlet wind Medicine Cat of SolarClan 04:38, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above-- Night  shine  20:33, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Alt. A) - Declined
Crystalstar999 09:23, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

She has been described as mottled, but I think this will have to be declined because we don't know what the colour of the pelt is. 18:10, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. And I agree with Moonleaf. Scarlet wind Medicine Cat of SolarClan 22:49, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above-- Night  shine  20:49, February 6, 2011 (UTC)