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Morningflower (Ki) ~ CBA
How do you people charart?? How the **** did I charart??????? How did I kit blank? o.O

Did you have the file? I got the file from Fox a while back if you need it :) 13:13, 9/05/2016

Nope lmao I completely forgot there even was a thing called files and just absolutely screwed this into a mess xP it'd be great if you can send the files to saito.yukina@gmail.com ^^

Sent! 13:48, 9/05/2016

re-ups Received~thx ummm.... that's... not a lot of layers

Define the shading? It's a little hard to make out. 19:03, 9/07/2016

re-ups I thought it looked fine on my screen, but it this better now?

Comments???

Could you smooth out the shading on the front/chest a little bit? 16:23, 9/11/2016

re-ups ...I didn't expect this to take that long.

CBA?

Flowerpaw (SC) (App.) ~ For Approval
01:17 Tue Sep 6

The shading's seeking from the.... butt/hind leg/tail area, and can you unblur the shading overall to define the shading and light source a bit more?^^

Excuse me if I'm mistaken, but isn't she supposed to be silver? This looks relatively close to a darker gray. 03:27, 9/06/2016

Re-uploaded 00:32 Wed Sep 7

I think possibly get rid of some shading? It's really hard to make out the silver on multiple screens. Also, if possible, define your lightsource and possibly lighten the shading a tad. 00:38, 9/07/2016

The base still looks incredibly dark for a silver/silver-gray cat. 15:08 Thu Sep 8

Re-uploaded 23:17 Thu Sep 8

Could you define the light on the image?

Re-uploaded 23:20 Fri Sep 9

Define the light on the legs, tail, and face. 18:13, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:59 Sat Sep 10

I'm still having a hard time making out your lightsource. I firmly believe you should still erase some shading. 01:14, 9/11/2016

Sorry but I don't get it. I've already added more light and erased/lightened the shading a lot. Where should I erase the shading from? 01:45 Sun Sep 11

Hmm...well, first off, where is your lightsource coming from? If it's from where I presume, then possibly erase shading on <== side of the face, add shading on ==> side of the face, erase some shading on <== side of front chest, and <== side of all legs; add a tiny bit more shading on the ==> sides of all the legs, as there wouldn't be a lot of light shining there, and possibly some on the tail, too? I also see quite a bit of leaking shading around the image. Sorry if this is a lot ^^; 02:33, 9/11/2016

Re-uploaded Thanks for explaining, Winter. I hope it's better now. <span style="">17:10 Sun Sep 11

Pretty kitty. The shading is leaking slightly on the back and belly, and perhaps define the light on the tip of the tail.

Muchos better! :D Maybe possibly add a tad more light, or erase more shading, to the head and along the top between the ears? <span style="">19:45, 9/11/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">22:05 Sun Sep 11

The belly is still leaking shading a little, and I'm not positive, but the head/top of head between the ears still looks the same to me? Forgive if I'm wrong. <span style="">22:49, 9/11/2016

Re-uploaded I did get rid of a bit of the head shading; if you compare it to the previous version you can see that it is lightened. <span style="">23:59 Sun Sep 11

I see it too, the shading is still there. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:23, September 12, 2016 (UTC

Define light on paws -- seems a bit too covered in shading imo

Re-uploaded Winter didn't tell me to get entirely rid of the shading, she just told me to lighten it a bit, which I did. <span style="">23:58 Mon Sep 12

Where did I say just to lighten it? I don't see where I said that... <span style="">00:36, 9/13/2016

Maybe smooth out the shading on the shoulder and side? 11:33, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded You said "add a tad more light, or erase more shading, to the head and along the top between the ears?", which is what I did. That's what I meant by lightening it. <span style="">23:33 Wed Sep 14

Hmm...that's not how I meant to say it. Sorry! I still think you should get rid of a little more shading on the head. Between the ears and along the face. <span style="">12:49, 9/16/2016

if possible, can you erase that shading on the front of the shoulder/leg? it's making it look a little blotchy. 21:01, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Honeypaw (VS) (A) ~ For Approval
I screwed up on the splotches and eyes, I'll fix them when I can. Also, morale: don't close down your computer without closing your tabs, as you could lose important work...like this post. --

Neon, you're supposed to wait until the image you had first is archived before putting another one up. <span style="">11:53, 9/08/2016

It's fine, everyone is allowed one time. That being said, this should be "for approval", since you already posted at least one image before.

Smudge the earpink, smudge the shading and lighten it?  ~ Silver Cloud ~   14:51, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, in that case, could you smooth out the yellow splotches some? <span style="">15:07, 9/08/2016 15:07, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the stripes just a little bit? They are very hard to see. They aren't incredibly dark on the kit, but they are more visible than they are here if that makes any sense. <span style="">15:14 Thu Sep 8

needs a white pixel in each eye. 18:37, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups I tried putting the lines on another layer so I could attack the splotches with my blurring tool viciously make more blurs without ruining the stripes. --

Can you blur the shading more? <span style="">06:42 Fri Sep 2016

Just curious as to know why there's tabby fur in her ear? <span style="">22:28, 9/09/2016

Because... | does? Reupload --

Smooth out the shading you have, and add some to the front leg closest to us and the tail. 18:11, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add/define tail shading. --  22:58, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

The ear pink seems really neon so maybe darken it a little? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:58, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload Me: "I'll try to watch some of ZSlyzer's Spirit of Justice Playthrough!" >27 20-30 minute episodes in 4 days Me: "crap I have loads of time-wasting to do" And that, my friends, was the story of why I wasn't working. --

The shading still needs to be smoothed out quite a bit more, imo, as well as the yellow splotches. They all seem too defined still. <span style="">16:33, 9/11/2016

Re-upload When I accidentally turned up the shading to 100.0 I panicked and turned it down and I found 50.0 looks really good compared to 35.0. So yeah that's the shading right now BACK TO BINGE WATCHING SOJ -- and if someone knows how to code the timestamps that'd be great because I have no idea of how to code size and font

For lack of better words, the shading seems really dense/thick, so could you maybe make it blend more in a gradient with the image?

Re-uploaded Finished watching Spirit of Justice's case 2, decided to take a grace period so I work on other things also I feel very sorry for my lovable spineless cinnamon roll, apollo at the end of the case --

(apollo needs a break lmao) anyway can you define the tail shading? 14:00, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload Yes poor Apollo. I love the music that plays during that scene though I need to find it --

Could you blend the shading some more?  <span style="">08:29 Fri Sep 16 

Re-ups Nothing much to say except I'm really sleepy. Neon's discipline period of no watching SoJ ends tomorrow, so at least I can watch Rite to Turnabout (or whatever they called it my memory is very bad today cause sleep deprived I had to finish an essay about london 2012 only slept at 11:30 PM ((11:30 is a very big strain on Neon's poor body clock BTW))) when I wake up. report report the song was called troupe gramarye 2016 guys now I can listen to it to my heart's content --

Could you smooth out the shading a little on her main body and haunch? Nice image, by the way. 20:51, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe make the stripes a bit sharper to match the kit.

Re-upload Thanks, Ivy. Really proud on the tail. *kisses tail* fear the perfection of the bee kitten's tail. This time on "it really sucks to be a japanfornian lawyer/work for a japanfornian lawyer", I'm rethinking if Benjamin Franklin REALLY meant there were only two certain things in life. This third thing...is Maya getting accused of murder. --

Juniperclaw (Ro) ~ For Approval
man its been forever — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:04, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   20:34, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

The shading I used is pure black. Its the darkest, at 100% and blurred and all. Could I get some more comments on that? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 04:02, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

define doesn't mean darken, it means make more visible. Which reminds me, I can't see a source with this and the shading kinda seems all over the place. Did you use a different image as a reference?

No, the light source comes from the left. It's similar to the rogue images I looked at for examples which was Tigerstar and someone else, can't remember them rn. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:56, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

I think maybe reduce the chest shading some and it's fine. 03:13, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

I think it might be my computer, but on the shoulder, it looks like the shading is a square? Like right by the chest. <span style="">16:32, 9/11/2016

No, I see it. I'll fix that. I'll most likely have it up Monday or Tuesday. I'm mobile rn. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:47, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Ups, removed the square and some of the chest shading. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:18, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading by the front leg? It looks like it's a bit bold next to the rest of the shading, might just be me. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   15:19, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 15:55, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 11:57, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

Tiny speck of waste above the back. <span style="">21:55, 9/15/2016

Re-Upps, removed the tiny speck of waste — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:12, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Strikestone (W) -CBA
So beautifully overly complicated. <span style="">22:47 Fri Sep 9

define the tail shading? 14:25, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also redid the eyes/eye color and messed with the colors to make the stripes/markings a little easier to see. <span style="">20:17 Sat Sep 10

This is beautiful, Sun! Also, idk if it's just me, but it looks like the earpink goes all the way down to his cheek? If that makes any sense? Like, it looks connected. <span style="">16:28, 9/11/2016

Thanks Winter! And that is just the lighting playing tricks lol. His earpink ended at the white, it's just very deceiving with the highlight there. <span style="">19:08 Sun Sep 11

I'm actually having a really rough time seeing the ear pink. o.o could you define it or perhaps tweak the coloring a tiny bit?

Reuploaded I actually had it beneath the shading by mistake after I tweaked the colors lol. Better now? <span style="">23:40 Mon Sep 12

Much better, that made a world of difference! Maybe define the shading just a tad on the back foot that's most visible? idk the "front back foot" or whatever the term is, I'm sleepy.

Reuploaded <span style="">20:55 Thu Sep 15

Comments before approval? 03:10, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Puddleshine (MCA) - CBA
Round two on this one. ^^ I'm pretty happy with this. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:37, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink? It looks like pure ear fur to me. <span style="">16:26, 9/11/2016

That would be because I forgot to change the color from the old charart. :P Reuplaoded - better now? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:28, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth the shading some please? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 19:50, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:29, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 03:10, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) ~ For Approval
Must get this one approved ;) --  21:13, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

lighten him up some, he looks more grey right now. 21:16, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth and define shading? <span style="">21:17, 9/11/2016

Add more shading on head and have it some forward a bit more, and also define your light source.

Re-uploaded --  22:58, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Waste in a ring around the image. <span style="">18:21, 9/12/2016

I can't see it...--  22:08, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

It's definitely there -- around most areas of the image.

If possible, could anyone give me a redline on where the waste is so I can pinpoint it? --  02:01, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, here you go. I made the backdrop white too, so the waste is easier to see. This should be pretty accurate -- used color-select to pick it up. Anyway, can you define the light source again? It seems a tad bit randomly placed in some spots. I can draw that up too for you if need be

Re-uploaded. Is this better? --  21:05, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Better, but here's the updated red-line with the stuff that's still there. Also, the image looks really gray -- could lighten the base to make him more silver? And I still can't make out the light source.

Re-uploaded.--  01:47, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

Almost,, but not quite. You also might've erased a little too much on the back of the head, since it appears to be leaking away from the lineart.

Re-uploaded --  23:22, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

You're literally so close to getting all of it -- just this left.

Re-uploaded --  00:47, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading just a tad? <span style="">05:59 Fri Sep 2016

^Except for the two lines of shading between the shoulder/haunch and the belly, those are about the darkness you should probably aim for on the rest of the shading. Those two lines seem fairly blocky and look somewhat like blurry markings - I think that could be fixed by thinning them out and making them curve a little to the shape of the body, and perhaps making them reach a little less far up. Since I'm bad at explaining, I think this is a little closer to what you should be going for with that.  <span style="">08:27 Fri Sep 16 

Re-uploaded --  12:35, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? Also, the tail seems to be leaking shading. <span style="">12:47, 9/17/2016

Lionpaw (VS) ~ For Approval
It's been a long time, so I'm sorry as to how bad this is. 15:55, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

Could you possibly darken the pale part on the underbelly a smidge? It looks a tad too white. <span style="">18:21, 9/12/2016

Just gonna nudge in here and rename this to File:Lionpaw (VS).apprentice.png for you.

Reups thanks Jayce :3 11:26, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the shading is too dark and too unsaturated (I know it's like that on the kit but I feel as though the shading on that one is a bit too dark as well)  02:56, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 11:27, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Snakepaw (A) ~ For Approval
21:42, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

Pretty kitty! Could you define the shading on the head a tad? <span style="">22:00, 9/13/2016

reuploaded thank u 00:35, September 14, 2016 (UTC)

can I get some comments or smth please 00:14, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more, please. 03:09, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Larkpaw (TC) - CBA
~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   23:27, September 12, 2016 (UTC)

Just sliding in here to rename this to File:Larkpaw (TC).apprentice.png, as per our naming guidelines. You can continue to reupload over the renamed file.

Comments?

~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   19:24, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Silt (Ro) ~ For Approval


Define the light on the legs farthest from us, and smooth out the shading? <span style="">21:59, 9/13/2016

Reuploaded For the light on the legs, I don't actually think there should be any as this is basically the shading placement from the apprentice tutorials lol. That and it's also used on Rain (TAQ)'s image so yeah

Mmm, true, but not all shading works on every image. Plus, with your lightsource, there would be light there. Also, there's a strange darker line on the back? <span style="">22:56, 9/13/2016

Reuploaded Hmm.... played with the shading a bit -- did it fix that darker line you saw? I couldn't see it on my screen but I was tweaking that area so idk if it's still there.

do you think you could thin out or lighten the shading around the haunch/chest area? it looks odd as is. 20:35, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better?

It's a darker area of shading now, but it fixed it as much as I saw. Could you smooth the shading some more? <span style="">21:58, 9/15/2016

Reuploaded

Could you define chest light? Also, I'm fairly sure since your light source is coming from <== (I think? If I'm wrong feel free to ignore) there would be more shadow on the tail. <span style="">06:00 Fri Sep 2016

Reuploaded

Hmm...for lack of a better word, the shading looks pretty blotchy on the main flank/body. Do you think you could try and smooth it out some more? <span style="">12:49, 9/17/2016

Tree (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors from the loner. Comments? 21:07, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

It's perfect! I don't think it needs any editing. :) Bluedragon64 (talk) 21:15, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

for the millionth time, don't comment unless it's critique. 21:16, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the back and around the neck, and then define the light on the tail? Ignore the neck part if it's just my screen.

Maybe add a little shading depth on the front legs and tail? Cute! 21:26, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 21:33, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, tail, and head, and smooth out the shading on the chest/back area? <span style="">21:58, 9/15/2016

Reuploaded. 22:28, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

Make the stripes a little bit darker?  ~ Silver Cloud ~   18:51, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck and face just a tiny bit? 20:58, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:13, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Strikestone (A) ~ For Approval
I think I can be proud of this one :D  <span style="">02:05 Wed Sep 14 

I'm sorry, but could I please have some comments on this?  <span style="">09:28 Sat Sep 17 

Could you add a little more shading on the paws/legs? <span style="">12:50, 9/17/2016

Violetpaw (Ro) - For Approval
I'm so sleepy and super busy with work so here have a Violetpaw.

define shading a lil — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:12, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is fine, tbh. I think it needs a little more smudging/smoothing, though. Just a smidge. Beautiful, Skye. <span style="">21:59, 9/15/2016

Birchpaw (SC) (App.) ~ For Approval
This was hard o-o 19:40, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

This looks amazing! Smooth out the shading everywhere, and define shading on the shoulder? <span style="">22:00, 9/15/2016

Nice. :) I can give you the file, if you want. The stripes look a little blurry. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 23:41, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

Bluebellkit (Star) ~ For Evaluation
(talk) 20:18, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

you have to reserve this. 20:23, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Ok i reserved it.Bluedragon64 (talk) 20:31, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Technically, you are supposed to reserve an image before you post it. <span style="">20:46, 9/16/2016

Maybe also wait patiently until your join request is approved, since things marked for eval. are meant for kits of the project

actually you're allowed to just add yourself into the table without having to join if you want, 20:51, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

The background needs to be transparent, and the shading could also be defined. It also appears some of the lineart is covered up. But yep, you don't have to join the project to make art, but since I see you've asked on the talk page to join, I will go and add you now. 21:08, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Add a little depth to the eyes - vary the colour so it's not all one shade. Check out the apprentice tutorials, for a little help! 21:37, September 16, 2016 (UTC) Ok thx.

Brindlepaw (WC) (A) - For Approval
00:29, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think Brindelpaw Son of Breezpelt and nephew of Lionblaze and Jayfeather needs 2 B edited. I think it's perfect the way this charart is!Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:52, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

Bluedragon, you have been warned countless times for posting comments that aren't critique. :/

Also, Ivy, this is very beautiful! Idk if it's just me or what, but it appears the shading from <== that ear is leaking onto her forehead a little? Also, could you define the shading on both paws closest to us, so both her left paws, front and back? And possibly smooth out the shading a little bit more on the haunch/hind end area leading down her back left leg? <span style="">12:54, 9/17/2016

Lynxkit (Star) ~ For Approval
This is one of my best chararts o-o. Also, is it just me, or is this spoopy kitty reminding anyone else of Halloween? <span style="">01:18, 9/17/2016

Oh wow this is looks just like my cat named Spooky that I adopted last haloween.... Anyway, define the shading on the tail a touch? Really great kitty

What does Spooky look like? Anyways add just a touch more shading on the paw closest to us. Adowable pumpkin kitty. --

Could you define the shading on the main body as well, please?  <span style="">10:18 Sat Sep 17 

Re-uploaded *Yawns* This is about as much as I can define body shading, as the lightsource is shining nearly right on it. Also defined depth as well. <span style="">12:27, 9/17/2016

Sparkpelt (W) - For Approval
The old reservation on the table doesn't have a date so I think I'm good to take this...? All the colors were pulled from her apprentice 06:16, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think it's purrfect the way it is but you might want to make her ears a little pinker unless thats too pink for this character. Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:50, September 17, 2016 (UTC)

I feel as if this is a little darker than the kit and apprentice images? Forgive if I'm wrong. Also, I think the stripes need to be a little thicker and smudged to match the other images. <span style="">12:58, 9/17/2016