Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 5

Shrewpaw (TC)- Approved


Now that Ivykit is approved I wanted to upload an image of Shrewpaw I've had waiting on my computer. I felt sorry for him; he shouldn't have died so early...Anyway, constructive critisism please Sandy Talk! 16:50, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

I think the back shading could be blended more. I like it otherwise.--DarkHallows Lair 03:29, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

I love it almost as much as I love Shrewpaw. Well done Sandy. -- Dawnfeather 08:20, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

I increased the blending whilst tring not to lose the highlight contrast with the shading Sandy Talk! 18:41, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

I like it, but I can barely see the ear pink.--Warrior♥ 20:31, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

Maybe increase the ear pink a bit like Warrior♥ suggested, and then this would be ready for approval. -- Bramble Bramble's Realm 01:35, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Okay, will do as soon as I get on my main computer again - I'm using my mum's laptop right now. Sandy Talk! 15:14, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Better? Sandy Talk! 19:12, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Yeah. Awesome. --Warrior♥ 00:21, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Sunpaw-Approved



 * My first tortoiseshell, please comment. -- Ms T C 19:57, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

I think she's pretty, but torties tend to be a little more... smudged. Could you smear the colors a little?--DarkHallows Lair 03:26, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

I like it, but the line between the white or oragne, i can't remember, and the black on the neck should either be a different shape or in a different place. It looks awkard. The white smude above the eye does too. This is all on first immpressions. -- Dawnfeather 06:05, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

This is the best tortoiseshell I've seen Mal, well done. I think Dawnfeather's right in that the white above the eye looks weird. I know she needs to have it but perhaps it could be a little more in line with the outline, and smaller as if it is on the middle of her head between her eyes not above one of them. Sandy Talk! 18:35, 15 May 2009 (UTC)


 * I took everyone's suggestions and fixed it up. I had to upload a new file though because the old one would not change when I uploaded a new version, and then it would finally change when I tried to upload it again. -- Mallinois Herding Talk 19:25, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

I really like this now, I don't see anything wrong with it. Awesome job. -- Bramble Bramble's Realm 01:35, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Much better, I think it's ready now. :) Sandy Talk! 15:15, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Blackclaw - Approved
Since Blackclaw's description is a smoky black tom, I tried to make him look smoky. And for some reason the eyes look weird to me. Any tips? -- Bramble Bramble's Realm 01:16, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Cute! I think it's ready to be approved already.--DarkHallows Lair 06:06, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

The smokiness is great Bramble! I think the problem with the eye is the placing of the black and white pixels. Try moving the white one to the far left and the black one just underneath...I dunno; that's what I normally do... Other than that I really like this. Sandy Talk! 15:18, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Took your advice on the eyes, Sandy, and I borrowed the color Skyfeather used for Breezepelt on the irises, and they look a ton better. Anything else? -- Bramble My Realm 02:55, 19 May 2009 (UTC)

No. This looks really great Bramble - you're getting very efficient :) Sandy Talk! 11:00, 19 May 2009 (UTC)