Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 140

Darkstripe (Alt.DF3) - Approved
12:04, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

theres a random pixel by his tail. 14:45, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe blur the stripes a tad? Lovely job, as always. 21:40, July 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think they need to be blurred, personally. Maybe smudged a bit to give it a fur texture look, but that's just a suggestion. Anyway, add shading to the bottom of the chin? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:07, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Buutiful :D Define light on the shoulder^^ I think the stripes are fine.

Re-ups Thanks:) I smudged them a bit 16:31, July 4, 2015 (UTC)

Possibly smooth the shading a liiiiiittle bit more? 03:35, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:47, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 11:14, July 8, 2015 (UTC)

It hasn't quite been three days yet (you still have like eight and a half hours according to the wiki clock), but anyways, can you define the shading itself on the tail..? The depth could probably be a bit more visible.

Re-ups I hope its okay now,cuz i'm going on a 7 day holiday and wont be able to work in this :p

The whole tail should be in shadow. 01:16, July 9, 2015 (UTC)

The tail is fine. 19:51, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed with Icy. CBA?

Approved.

Frecklewish (TC) (Alt.W3) - Approved
She was called pale brown. 00:13, July 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, and if she's pale brown I think she could be lightened slightly. 01:25, July 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Lightened the base a little bit. 01:41, July 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten her up just a tad more please? I think pale brown should be much lighter than this. 23:27, July 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:34, July 11, 2015 (UTC)

Oh my gawd this is gorgeous! Maybe define the earpink just a tad, I know it's there, but it doesn't stand out too much for me to seperate it from the main pelt color :P

Re-upped Thanks! 14:04, July 12, 2015 (UTC)

Love those spots. Define the shading on the top o' the head? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:48, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her front paws. 19:50, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 20:22, July 13, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? This is pretty.

Approved.

Hootwhisker (W) - Approved
The apprentice doesn't have texture, it's just how it's smudged. I can't match Sorrel's style and it's not required to anyways.

Could you smudge the earpink a little? 23:28, July 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can do that.

He seems... darker than the apprentice? >.> Define shading on his leggies a slight

Why the ">.>"...???? Re-uploaded. I color-picked from a different spot this time.

Smooth and pretty as a pancake (lol). CBA?

Approved.