Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 56

Darkstar (RC) ~ Silver Nomination
I believe that her article is looking good! I think she has some good quotes at the bottom, and a great main quote. I expanded her history a lot, too. So, Comments? 19:35, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any longer quotes that she says or the narrator says? Also, you might just want to proofread to catch any mistakes. Looks great! 19:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I just read the book, and there's some other longer quotes that can be added. And I got a lot of grammar mistakes, but I'm not sure if that's all. 23:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about the quotes; I added a lot in. 23:49, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good, thanks! I'm gonna go check right now if I can expand it or anything else. 23:54, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Could you cut up the first paragraph of Code of the Clans to different ones? It looks too...big. 20:05, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. ☀  S q  u  i  r  r  e  l  F  l  a  m  e  2  9 ☀   Finally   Cooling   it   Down  21:16, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! 16:51, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else I can do? 03:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. 17:01, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 17:48, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Vote's up!

Good :D 17:29, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Milkfur (RC) - Silver Nomination
There isn't much information about Milkfur, so what else could I do to the article? 03:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any quote(s) such as from the narrator that can be used as a main quote? 04:13, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's the ONLY quote I could find for him. 04:23, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Where does it say he is a tom? As I recall, the book never said if Milkfur was a tom or she-cat. Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  14:17, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I just checked, and you might want to get a reference for that. 23:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I removed the gender thing, so now he/she is upspecified, I just forgot to say that 22:03, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, looks good! 18:41, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBV list for this one too. 20:22, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a while, shouldn't this go up for a vote? 21:25, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the other ones above this were up longer, and it's basically first come, first serve. Those will get voted first, and then this. 22:06, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok 00:55, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 14:47, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:12, August 17, 2011 (UTC)