Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Dapplepelt (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to remove white. Not sure if this color looks ok but I'm not removing the patches. I think the eyes are also the wrong color (they were changed after I was done with them) so I'll fix that on this and the MC in my next reupload  03:46, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more brown patches elsewhere to make these ones fit in better with the rest of the pattern?

Maybe make the patches black? If you don't want to, that's fine, though. I just think the brown color is a bit jarring. 4:13 Fri Oct 30

Reuploaded  04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the med. 09:13, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hey ivy i have mfv right here and it says dappled pelt is an orange and white tortoiseshell. 12:41, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's probably just me or my monitor but the new brown patches look kinda green?

There appears to be a bit of waste under her chin and around her tail. -- 18:02, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Snow, Dapplepelt isn't actually described as dappled anywhere? Plus, dappled is a word used in warriors on more than just torties, and a word rarely used to describe cats outside of the series at all. So basically all it has to do is fit the definition of "spots or round patches" if they're described as dappled. It doesn't have any "official" link with any color or genetics or anything.

Paleh, I think you misunderstood. She's saying Dappled Pelt is described as an orange-and-white tortie, not that she's dappled. Her name in Dawn of the Clans and Moth Flight's Vision is Dappled Pelt, not Dapplepelt.

Ohhh whoops, my bad. I thought that didn't quite make sense... but anyways, where's the cite? I don't see it on the page. I get that it's in mothflight's vision, but it's not currently on the page, so

Well, the book's not released yet, so we can't officially add it. Winter got her copy before the release date.

In that case, should we hold off her images then? I don't know when that's supposed to be released but if it's just going to be reverted, shouldn't the work not be put into it? 03:10, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Since she has a cite now for the white can we revoke the tweak nomination? 06:00, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

no because she's an orange-and-white tortoiseshell, therefore we need to get rid of the brown and reduce the amount of black, basically calling her a calico 13:13, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think we can simply undo her tweak. She already has very little black on her, I don't think it matters. 13:38 Tue Nov 3

It does matter because orange-and-white implies there's less black, and there was very little white on her to begin with 18:02, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I can add more white but this tweak is to remove the white all together, totally different thing and from what I know we're not allowed to change what we were tweaking for initially. And this is a whole different tweak and my tweak time, as well as the others are nearly up  22:35, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

She was confirmed to be an orange-and-white tortie, so that nullifies the "removing the white" tweak- you'd be allowed to do what someone else suggests. Honestly, I also think you'd be allowed an extension, given that when this was put up, we were unaware of her description in Moth Flight's Vision.

Reuploaded I looked up orange and white tortie and this is what I'm sticking with because plenty of these came up in the search results. Imitating smudging without a smudging tool is difficult  07:29, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the white. Also, the white looks gray 07:33, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

But the shading has to be lighter on the white so that it doesn't look gray? I'm not really sure how to define it while at the same time, de-graying it? 07:40, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think it's fine as it is...

I agree w/ Fox tbh. Please define the shading. The white only looks grey on the tail... 11:05, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

It looks good, but define the earpink a bit more? — Even the most simplest of lies   can change   undefinedeverything.undefined  20:03, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I really, really cannot see the leg shading. Please define it. 02:47, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still not sure how to define it while making it less gray ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ any help? 05:57, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

I would say that you could add another layer of thinner, darker shading to define the shading on the legs a little more. Some highlights would also brighten up the white. Personally, only the white on the tail looks gray. perhaps you could possibly thin out the shading there, or reposition the white elsewhere. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:00, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 06:10, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

are changes showing or... (because i see changes on the med)

Dapplepelt (MC)- Tweaked
^Same as above  03:47, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the paws 09:12, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be gold. 11:38, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  07:29, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  06:07, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Fernshade (W) ~ Tweaked
when yuo try your best but you don't succ

oa was scar, redone by night shine. tweaked to remove white 11:58 Wed Nov 4

could you define the shading? 08:38, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

still working? 02:47, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I just haven't had time to do anything yet. I'll upload tonight. 03:19 Sun Nov 8

Re-uploaded im sorry night 11:57 Mon Nov 9

its still looking really white 22:47, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

unless you want it to not match this is the most i can do 23:08 Mon Nov 9

Rain (Alt.E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Iceheart22 and tweaker is Rowanflight. Tweaked for neon ear pink and scars and shading issues. I don't seem to have fixed it enough, the shading's so overblurred >< advice to fixing it? 09:15, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot. o.o It's really dark.

Reupload Argh it's even worse. Not sure how to fix it >< 05:12, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you dull the earpink/scar? The color still seems pretty bright. 21:40, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 21:51, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more- it still looks kinda blotchy in some places, especially the back and haunch.

Reupload I can't do much considering I don't have the file. I tried blurring more the extra shading I put. 23:19, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Spiderleg (A) ~ Tweaked
OAs were Shimmerpool, Ivyheart, and SnowedLightning. Tweaked to restrict brown to underbelly only. -- 19:26, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading 22:45, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 01:22, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (Star) ~ Redone
Redone to remove white. OA was Jayce. 16:51, 09, 11, 2015

She needs ragged fur. 16:59 Mon Nov 9

Re-uploaded I totally forgot about the fur my bad 18:25, 09, 11, 2015

These both need some more black 22:44, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think the colors quite match. The darker ginger is #87441b and the creamy one is #cf8859. Would you like the file for the warrior? 2:15 Tue Nov 10

Willowshine (Alt.) (K) - Tweaked
OAs were Frostheart and myself. tweaked for sourceless shading and earpink 01:07 Tue Nov 10

I still can't see your light source.

There also needs to be some depth on the tail and leg shading. Even if the light source landed both of them completely in the dark, they would still have shading to show depth, rather than being one solid color.

Petaldust (W) - Tweaked
OA of this version is me and the original image was Roo. All I did was toggle the white layer off.

Could you define the shading on the legs and main body? It's looking a little flat. 18:05 Tue Nov 10

Re-uploaded.

Alder (Ki) - Tweaked
OA is me and I had to add some really gross brown to this.

This is the male blank. 14:33, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No, it's not. I just worked over parts of the lineart and forgot to erase some of it. It's very much still the female blank... Although tbh we don't need "female" and "male" blanks; it's stupid.

If that actually becomes a discussion brought up I'm gonna cry. I know you'll kill me for saying this, but I legit can't see any shading. Can you please define it or darken it? 00:37, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (Ancient) - Tweaked
OA is me,added more white 20:39, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you reduce the amount of white on her lower chest by her paws? On her other images, it doesn't go down that far 00:40, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (W) - Tweaked
OA was Goldenpaw, redone by Mistypebble, and then tweaked by me. Tweaked to be dark ginger. 22:40, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Crowfeather (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to lighten and to add a smoke chest.

Get rid of the smoky gray chest, that should not be on his image if hes not cited for it. same goes for the rest of his images 02:04, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smoky is a pattern. A smoky chest is perfectly acceptable. 02:12, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think it could be darkened. I know it was tweaked to be lightened, but to me it barely looks dark gray. 02:22, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I darkened the base a few ticks

Darken it a few more ticks- now it looks too light.

Crowfeather (K) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to lighten and to add a smoke chest.

Re-uploaded

Crowfeather (A) - For Approval
OA is me, the older image's artist was Scarlet. 01:56, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the warrior and kit- darken him a bit. Now he's too light.

Larksong (E) ~ Redone
Redone to remove white. OA was Jayce. 19:06, 09, 11, 2015

I am restoring this to the tweak page because there are points addressed above that need to be fixed. 05:32, November 11, 2015 (UTC)