Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Blossomfall (W) - Redone
I think it's too smudged. It needed petal shaped patches, and I redid the coloring so it didn't look multi-colored instead of tortoiseshell. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, the orignal artist was Icestorm. You don't mind if I continue to work on this Icestorm do you? ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:49, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well....I didn't see the problem before.... 21:52, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

If you mean the original image by "before" it was on the tweak list for petal shaped patches. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

It is. Lighten the shading, and blur the patches. 21:56, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but did it really require to be re-done? 21:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- no, but adding the patches would've meant adding shading and highlights, and they were all around. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add a pixel for her eye color below her white. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sucks to have your images randomly redone doesnt it Icy? Make the yellow more ginger. 23:14, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white chest, it's starting to look grayish. 23:41, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, it looks better than my first image anyways. I just wanted to know why, I didn't see it on the Tweak List. xD 00:26, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, that was uncalled for. Also, Icestorm, it's been on the tweaking list for a while now. Lighten the shading/darken it so all the white fur matches. It seems the feet are lighter then everything else. 13:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't check xD Darken the shading 19:53, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I really suck at tortoiseshells XP. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:05, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make it a bit more red? The yellow i mean. 00:30, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks really awesome! Blur the ear pink a tad bit more. 02:40, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- does the orange look okay? I had to make sure the sponge didn't saturate anything else. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 16:07, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The orange looks fine. Darken/redden the earpink a bit though. 17:01, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks Poppypelt! ^^ ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:51, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chedst shading and tail shading. It looks better than mine. =P 13:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks Icestorm, but I don't think this is that good. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 18:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh please. Lighten the tail shading at the base of the tail. 12:04, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make another white patch on her tail on the (our) left side but have the lineart cut it off? (I hope you know where I mean) because it looks mostly black. Wonderful job! 17:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks. But I think I made the white look odd. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

The white parts look almost gray, can you lighten it? 21:27, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:29, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Tweaked
Original artist was Elorisa. I basically just darkened the stripes and the shading. Comments? 22:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could basically re-do the stripes? They're bothering me. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then that would basically be redoing the whole thing, right? ... and darken the tail shading. 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Um, no, it would just be re-doing the stripes... 00:25, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

But redoing the stripes would mean erasing the stripes, and then adding stripes, and adding shading again, even if you used layers, the shading would have to be redone...whatever. 00:27, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What's with all the hostility lately? Define the shading a little more. 00:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Then the shading could be re-done, if possible. 00:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me :). But I'm not much help with this, I'm the original artist xD. Lighten the stripes a tad, they seem really dark :3. Looks great, Dapplecloud! Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, can you make that large circly stripe on the chest less circlish? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  19:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Dapplecloud? 02:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm still working on it. 00:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Then why don't you upload it? :3 23:55, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define/darken the shading a little. -- 04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (D) Tweaked
Original Artist was Icestorm, and it just needed to be lightened :) 00:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Theres some unneeded earpink on the other ear XD -- 00:48, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, that's suppose to be there. His description says he has a scar behind one of his ears :P 00:49, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden/make it dark gray the scar, make the ear-pink a tad smaller, and darken the shading a tad more. This is looking good. 01:17, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looking better. Can you blur the haunch shading a tad?

Reuploaded. Blurred :P 04:23, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a tad? 21:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:34, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Theres still this weird spot on the other ear ._. Anyways, could you neaten the tail highlight & make it straighter? (Man, I couldnt even understand dat) -- 04:09, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

BlueOrca, that weird spot is a scar that's supposed to be there. Blur the midriff shading a little (shading just above the haunch). 20:13, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wait- That was a scar? psshh, I knew that >> -- 23:42, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Lol, Bloo, if you just read the comments previous, you would've known sooner. Also done. :) 23:32, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Please change the eye? ;) 01:14, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That went completely over my head, is this what you would like? :P 03:11, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Lo) - Withdrawn
I made this in advance a while ago, way before I even reserved it. And I hope this still counts as the 15th, because there's some discussion that shouldn't be here. Original artist was Minnowclaw, and the highlights and shading were blotchy. Changes won't show. 17:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It still counts, so don't worry. I'll be archiving that discussion now, since it's pointless. (xD) Darken the shading on the white areas, please. 17:25, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white part of his tail bigger 17:26, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail a bit. I like this new Ravenpaw. 20:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a darker red. 22:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dumb changes. 23:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Blur the highlights a little, and make the earpink go farther into the ear. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'm pretty sure you're looking at the wrong image, Shadewing. 00:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But I blurred the highlights anyways. Dumb server that isn't making the changes show. 00:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights; the shading needs to be more defined. ` 20:40, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing below the top box in the file history. 21:25, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, and more of a dark red, look at Nightwing for example. 01:13, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Still a weird color. Make it a dark red. Try - a94141. And define the shading. 21:13, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now the shading looks blotchy. I tried blurring, but nothing's working. 01:17, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

But I hate this anyways. I'm withdrawing this. 19:21, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Otterheart (W)- For Approval
Taking a break from all the tabbies, tortoiseshells, etc. and just doing a solid cat. XD She needed to be long haired, and the shading was a bit blotchy. OA was Bramble I believe. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:02, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw. Hands down, you are amazing with chararts. Darken the earpink just a tad ;3 23:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Awwww, thanks Splashy! ^^; ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:58, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

W00t; I love solids. ;D Can you darken the shading a bit? I like dark shading. =) Great job! 00:55, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I love solid cats too. :) I forgot how much fun they were to do. XD Anyways, darkened the shading, but changes aren't showing. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:58, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Bleh, I suck at solids >.> *eyes Fallowfern* brighten the tail highlight and blurr it X) -- 04:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Solids are boring. I'd rather do a tabby or a tortie. Define the shading a tad. xD 16:00, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's pretty! Define the ear pink a tad though. 16:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:50, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights and earpink, and, maybe it's just me, but I believe you have blurred lineart down the chest. Nice job, Paleclaw! Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:21, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Also, lighten the tail highlight. 20:40, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The highlights are almost invisible now except for the tail one, as they were at like 3% opacity before. There's no blurred lineart on the chest. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:58, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Heatherstar (L) - Redone
Here eye's kinda creep me out... Anyway, first leader charart up and ever since I first saw her's the highlight's have just been really bothering me. Redid the charart because the shading proved to be a real pain in the tail. Anyway, comments? 23:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make her eyes like they were. Make the nose a gray color since she was described as being gray (I think). Blur the shading a little more. (it's so much easier when the changes show to critique >~<) 23:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, make the earpink fill the ear to the line. Otherwise it's always gonna be small. 23:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Forgot to erase the waste around the head, I'll get rid of it later. @Ivy, she was described as pinkish-gray but I gave her a gray nose anyway. 23:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Dull the highlights a little, especially the chest and haunch. Also, blur the tail higlight. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:19, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

@Shadewing. I think you're looking at the wrong one. The changes aren't showing up now. 01:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry! xC Shadewing  Blades of the Night  01:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There's some waste around the head; delete those, and blur the shaidng more. Great job! 20:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are very blotchy. Make them smoother and move them upwards. 01:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Runningstorm (K) ~ Redone
Redone as *shorthair, and to match other pixels. Since I did Runningstorm's warrior, might as well do his kit, eh? OA was Dawnfeather I believe. You know where to find the changes :P 00:12, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think you mean shorthair....xD brighten the earpink. Sky- Killer of Daleks 00:16, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Derp, *shorthair. Thanks x) 00:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the light part on the chest. Very nice! 01:38, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white part, pinken the earpink, and darken the shading. Good job! 20:34, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :) You know where to find the changes :D 22:05, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur the chest; it looks a bit blotchy. Nice work! 22:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Copperpaw (A) ~ Redone


Redone as a longhair, and OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 21:12, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing on the file page. :D 21:13, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and blur the shading. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:19, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:52, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Could you maybe define the earpink a little? I can't really see it. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:08, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Are you sure you're looking at the right version? I just defined it. 22:09, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the earpink is from her original version, which was approved, so I'm not changing it. 22:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) (W) - Redone
Original artist was Sandstar and later tweaked by Goldenpaw to have a torn ear. He was listed as needing tweaks for multiple things (as different entries), and I deemed it that the image pretty much needed redone, as it had shading issues and needed to actually be flecked, not just having circles. I hope he actually looks flecked (I used Ferncloud as a reference), but if he looks more mottled, I won't have a problem changing that if you guys think it's a problem. Comments for improvement? 02:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Ivy! he looks dazzling! Just define the shading a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:31, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dangit I just realized I didn't save an .xcf copy of this. And thanks! 16:46, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and foreleg. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:18, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and the need for that can be thanked due to my epic fail -_- 20:53, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

In Cats of the Clans, he is depicted with stripes near his eyes, legs, and paws.SShould we add those? 21:09, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

CotC has so many mistakes, I don't like those should be considered accurate. However, if you want to add them, go ahead. 21:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

The chest shading needs to be blurred, as well as the back shading. Also, define the flecks on his tail. Great job! 22:05, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You're seeing the right one, right? Because I just blurred it 22:08, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried the tabby stripes on him. 22:25, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry! I was looking at the wrong one. So, its the version with the stripes, right>? :3 Blur the stripes, and try making them not so straight. 22:34, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just added a few stripes that weren't straight, as I do not have the layers for this anymore. 22:43, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now they just look kinda messy xD Define them a bit, and change the eye. 01:58, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by change the eye? 02:14, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

He looks.......werid with the stripes, maybe make them smaller? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:41, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to redo this. I've been so overwhelmed these past few days with junk to do, and it didn't help that I lost the layers to this. 02:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

D: but it's so beautiful...  ❀ wild  heart ❀    02:52, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ Redone
Original artist was Sparrowsong, and she needed to have mottled tortoiseshell patches. Comments? 03:38, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Define the earpink. 21:04, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the mottles near the head? They look too distinct. Also, make the earpink bigger, and darken teh shading. 21:54, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:10, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth the mottles a bit more and maybe make them a bit bigger and blur the patches a bit more and enlarge the ear-pink. 00:42, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MC) ~ Tweaked
Highlights made it look weird, and I personally think that the color brown it was didn't look right. Changes may not be showing here, but y'all know where to look. 02:06, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

You evil edit conflicter. The shading's odd looking...maybe darken it and blur? 02:20, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pale belly. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Icey pointed that out to me AFTER I uploaded it. Working on it now. 02:39, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:18, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MC) - Tweaked
- ok so i re-did the highlights. i understand they were cool and furry, but they were unrealistic. She also needed to be a dark grey and she looked more black then grey, so I colored her differnetly, and re-did her shading and highlights. i also thickened the scars on her face and tweaked the ear nick. Comments? 02:09, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Awesomeness! darken the shading along the back & on the back right foot -- 02:16, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading on the herbs, and I never got this so I'll ask now, why are they yellow? It just seems a bit odd, and never really made much sense to me.... I mean green-yellow looks fine, but just yellow..... Yeah. XD Also, it says torn earS. Meaning both. So tear the back on too. Also, point the tips of the scars on her face, and maybe add a few more scars in random places, as it says she's battle-scarred. This looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Pine(TS) (R)- Tweaked
Here, he is....i got bored with Pebblefoot.....so i withdrew him, and here is Pine, i just gave him battle-scars. *OA was Brambleclaw14 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:23, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cool scars. the pairs on his throat look akward. make some longer & shorter -- 02:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erase one scar on the haunch and make the pair further apart. Add depth to the eye. 02:26, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:30, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to add the OA, i feel so smart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:47, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit so it's not so candy-floss-pink, and sharpen the ends of the scars. <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hutch (KP) - Redone
Here's Hutch. OA was Ashshadow, and it needed to be lightened, but when I tried to lighten it, it looked kind of green, and I couldn't properly adjust the saturation to make it a normal shade of brown again. The stripes were kind of unrealistic to begin with. Comments? <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    02:52, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, i'm not sure if it will be declined or not..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:53, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. I'm archiving one of them anyways. It stays. Wonderful work, Wildheart! I missed looking at your chararts. =) 02:55, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then, i did to, define the shading a bit. so good to see you again :) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:56, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aw, thanks, guys :3 I didn't know what you mean, Maplepool, so I darkened the shading instead. <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:05, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

That is what define is anyway :P Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:17, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, awesome job!! Pinken the earpink -- 02:44, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Bloo :3 <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild  <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)