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Curlypaw (KP) - For Evaluation
I am a lot happier with this one! I like her eyes. 02:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reup 02:57, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading again please. 03:03, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:12, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the body (sorry that I'm not giving you a break). 03:37, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the <-- side 03:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be darkened - but it's probably the tint. Is the layer on Multiply? Try that if it's not, or change the brightness setting/saturation/contrast setting =)

Reuploaded 04:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste from the above <-- hip all the way to the underside of the tail. 04:42, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:36, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the eye-depth

​Reuploaded 21:50, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of shading to the collar? 00:14, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the bottom of the tail, and possibly darken the shading? 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:24, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading more. 15:12, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:59, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

darken the shading. not define, but darken. somewhere there should be a menu for "Hue" or "Brightness," for example, in firealpaca it's under filter. i believe that's what you use? anyway, darken it. 00:45, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:10, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's actually quite a bit of very light waste all around the image. 03:12, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:07, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the collar shading?

Reuploaded 22:48, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but shading appears to be leaking away from the lienart along the back, tail, and left cheek. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:06, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:21, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the eye depth a bit. 21:04 Wed Jan 11

Reuploaded 21:55, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

There's like a bump in the lineart at the front of the front leg. I think it's waste.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:34, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I erased all along there and there isn't a bump? did you mean the part of the collar?? There isn't anything. 00:40, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if I got it, but I think. Darn, my five day streak is gone. That's alright. -- 03:28, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the back and shoulder a little bit, as well as the collar

Reuploaded 05:07, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 5) ~ For Approval
He has a russet alt and a pale ginger alt, but he was also called dark ginger. Comments? 14:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Dull down the neon. 17:08, 1/08/2017

Reuploaded. 20:03, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs 23:38, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:02, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the belly color a bit? Looks too blotchyTawnyBracken (talk) 09:05, January 11, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. It was already smudged, but I went and smudged it a little more. 20:04, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back foot that we can see all of. It doesn't seem like there's shading there at all, when there kinda has to be. Also define the light on the tail.

Reuploaded. 13:33, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen the stripes a bit? When I first saw this, I thought you just drew lines on it. Sorry if I'm giving too much criticism...TawnyBracken (talk) 00:31, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. I redid the stripes, as I like this pattern a bit better. 01:24, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the stripesTawnyBracken (talk) 02:22, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to smudge the stripes, as they are only a few pixels wide at most, and smudging them would make them look distorted, to the point where one might not be able to tell they are stripes. 19:45, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck and also on the upper back area. 22:19, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:13, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the main body just a little bit? 21:32, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:22, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Comments? 07:02, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Cloudmist (W) - For Approval
will eventually tweak shading I think. All colors from apprentice file.

I know you said you might tweak the shading, but can you make the tail shading less lumpy (there's basically just a part in the middle that's not as shaded as the top and bottom), and try to define light/shade on the legs as you do that? Lovely white kitteh

Re-uploaded.

Define the earpink a little bit! :) 17:17, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

the tail shading could more visible Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 13:46, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

It's a couple pixels wide and difficult to shade. I'd like a second opinion on that, because I can see it just fine, even without my glasses on.

I agree with you Snowed, I can see it just fine. 14:28, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I agree, too. I think it's partly because the talon the warrior is so oddly skinny, there isn't a lot of room for shading + normal color to be shown. 21:49, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Could you dull down/reduce the highlights a little? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  17:38, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

It's pure white and I have no highlights. I can't dull anything. Pure white is very much allowed and all of my white cats have it as their base.

I thought it could of been highlights on the leg which gave it the hard edge so could you smooth out the shading on top of the front leg instead? — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:19, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't use highlights on anything. It's not required, therefore I find it pointless to fiddle with them when in most cases, it distorts coloring and causes me more trouble than it's worth.

Thistleheart (Star) ~ CBA
20:57, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten and smudge the shading in the direction of fur on the body instead of...every direction if you know what I mean? I thought this was a gray and white for a second =P

Recede/erase away some of the shading on the face, it feels like there's too much of it in shadow based on how much light is on the back. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 04:52, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:54, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Amazing! Alot better then I could do...lighten the shading a bit, looks gray on the flank and paws a tiny bitTawnyBracken (talk) 00:32, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Thanks! 13:30, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

The ear tips look a bit gray, like Snowfur's𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 23:15, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups 20:52, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

So sorry if her eyes are supposed to be light blue, I'm kinda stupid, but maybe darken the eye depth a bit?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 04:34, January 17, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

They're supoposed to be like this 18:52, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be two stripes in the --> eye.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  07:39, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, this is the eye-style I use one my Starclan characters 12:51, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking at the base of the right ear. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  19:37, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:56, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? I love the shading. 23:39, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smokefoot (Star) - For Evaluation
This didn't take very long, but I did my best! Phew...comments? :D

I fixed the heading, please remove the white background from the image 04:05, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Also, dull down the earpink, it looks too neon. 04:06, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Cinderpool, I don't know how to get rid of the white because this is my first chartart :( Can you tell me how to in the Warriors chat?TawnyBracken (talk) 04:11, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

I removed the alignments — remember to not align them. Also, define the shading on the arm and tail. 04:21, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

You have to acknowledge that you reuploaded the image so people know. Also, this has to be titled Smokefoot.star.png. Also, I've already said not to align your images and it is still aligned. I removed it again. 04:47, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Add more depth into the eye, and shading is out from the outline in below the chest, right from the right leg, underneath belly between left leg and tail, and above the tail by the back. Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:31, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploadedTawnyBracken (talk) 06:07, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Removed alignment. Reupload a new version of file instead of re-adding pic. You can click your charart image, tap on More Info, then go to file history and click ''Upload a new file. ''Shadowbright67 (talk) 06:22, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-because I forgot to shade the ear X3TawnyBracken (talk) 06:59, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-uploaded𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 07:29, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-uploaded to darken the eyes and smoothen out the shading𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:32, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

I think the ear pink is leaking off her head and the shading is leaking from the base of her tail. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  12:04, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 12:48, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Changed it to evaluation. This is your first one (I think) and you need to add yourself to the table and reserve this image. 16:13, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Blur shading. Also, why does it say that Applebreeze is doing this on the table. O_O 23:45, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:59, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Re-uploaded To fix leaking shading a bit, let me know if it's still visible and I'll do something about it❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 04:28, January 17, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Smooth out the shading a lot. It seems to drastically cut off, when it should be more of a gradient.

Wrenflight (Star) ~ Declined
Comments? First one! Spottedfire12 (talk) 07:56, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and smudge the ear. Great job on the eyes though!𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:00, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

''Re-up! ''Spottedfire12 (talk) 08:07, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe round off the shading on the flank? You could check out right here --> For shading advice if you need any because it doesn't match the shading placement𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:09, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Spottedfire12 (talk) 08:17, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken the eyes𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:35, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Spottedfire12 (talk) 08:40, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define/Darken a bit (but not too much) the shading on the face/head and tail. It's kinda hard to see. 16:07, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 01:08, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the flank :) 01:42, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups  01:51, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth a little? Also, I think the flank shading could use smoothing, if only to give it more depth

Still working?

Declined due to the lack of work. 23:41, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Foggy (Ro) (R) - Withdrawn
First charart! ^^ Comments? 03:52, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading everywhere, a bit. Also, define the eye depth. :) It looks great! 03:56, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 04:03, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Maube smudge/smoothen it a bit more? Near the flank, mainly. 04:04, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Redone  04:07, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but it looks like he has a blueish tint to him𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 06:30, January 15, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

^That's probaby the tinted shading, which is fine^^ but I do think that the tint could be darkened by a bit

Redone  14:31, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front paws, and smooth the body shading? Also define the shading on the --> back paw

Redone  19:43, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the <-- back leg. 15:30, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed out a bit. 00:37, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Redone  00:48, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge / smoothen shading around the flank. Shadowbright67 (talk) 03:43, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 11:43, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Comments? 10:57, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Looks really great :) Could you round out the shading on the flank some? It seems a little too rectangular on the back, for where light would hit

Redone  01:47, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

smooth out the shading

Withdrawing. 14:09, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Night (HJ) (K) ~ For Approval
Comments? 01:22, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

This file needs to be named File:Night (HJ).kit.png since it's a kit image

Redone 02:48, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

The white seems to be a bit blue, not sure if it's just me...❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 03:14, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Redone  03:24, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading :) 03:47, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Redone  11:45, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

The white still looks too blue on the chest. :) 01:02, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Redone  01:09, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

If the light is coming from the left, as it appears to be, I think there should be more light on the chest (and the white on the chest.) Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 00:12, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 00:17, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the --> ear pink please 01:15, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the black and smooth it a little. I can hardly see it, but it is sort of hard edged from what I can make out. 00:05 Sat Jan 21

Pricklekit (RC) (Star) ~ CBA


Beautiful! Mind fixing the eye depth a bit?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 05:57, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Reuploaded

Looks like the shading is cut off on the leg closest to us❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 05:50, January 17, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

It's not cut off; the light source calls for the shading placement to be as such, so it's supposed to be that way.

Smooth out the shading a bit. 03:43, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Comments?

CBA? 23:39, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Duckkit (K) - For Approval
All colors are from the kit. 02:22, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Amazing! I don't know if it's my screen or not, but define the shading?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:57, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

The stripes look a bit darker than the ones on the StarClan image. Shypaw11 (talk) 03:19, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 03:48, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 14:32, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 16:37, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Can you change the texture? As far as I know texture should be done to make it "fur-like", so the lines shouldn't be horizontal... unless it's the stripes instead of texture then by all means disregard me XD this is cute!

That's kinda the way I made them on the kit image though, but I see your point. Should I still change it? 03:39, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

I meant StarClan image. Wow I'm so tired... 03:41, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah I thought the texture was because the pose of the blank the fur kinda goes horizontally... Idk, let's see what others think on this ;P for now, try smoothing out the shading on /his/  left leg/paw?

Reups Still took me a few minutes to figure out which paw you were referring to XD 17:36, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the two front legs just a bit. 23:43, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 02:04, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Flailfoot (Star) ~ CBA
02:27, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the white in the eye...is it there? 03:49, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Could you make some shading on the chin? I think there should be some. ^^ 14:30, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 15:51, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Something is leaking on the ---> chest near the lineart. Can't tell what it is. 18:42, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 15:58, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 23:44, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Darktail (Kit) ~ For Approval
did the shading at midnight so it's messy 15:31, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Fixed the align. Remember no aligning! Also, he looks gray, lessen the texture a bit? 15:42, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten and smooth out the shading a bit. 17:28, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded insert creative message 21:14, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define/add the black markings that should be around his eyes? Also maybe smooth the shading on the legs

reuploaded i really shouldnt try smudged shading

Smoothen out leg shading -- 03:11, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. He's looking more gray than white for the most part. Also, lighten the tail a bit; I can't make out the lineart at all, and my moniter makes things appear lighter. 03:32, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

I can't lighten the tail, that's how it is on his other images. 03:34, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:35, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading more? The white really looks gray

reuploaded  03:28, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Where are the black spots on his eyes? 02:27, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

darnit, deleted the layer accidentally and saved and closed it by the time i noticed. those markings can actually be hard 00:18, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail i can bearly see it 23:40, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:32, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Sweetbriar (Ki) - For Approval
D'aw. 16:45 Wed Jan 18

Do you need and/or want the file for her queen image?

I think I'm good without it. I just need to shift the markings on her chest/neck area a little. I did this in the wee hours for fun/practice matching on the kit blank originally since I couldn't sleep lol. 19:11 Thu Jan 19

Reuploaded. 00:02 Sat Jan 21

Snakepaw (Ro) ~ For Approval
out of practice 18:39, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading? It looks super cool David {: 01:21, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 15:48, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Ryestalk (Star) - For Approval
Haven't done this in a while so I keep thinking I've done something wrong. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:14, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

This needs a reservation and date on the chart^^ :)

Smoothen out the flank shading a bit. c: 04:24, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thanks for telling me I knew there was something I missed c: - I smoothed the flank a little, but not too much as I like the style I created with it. Also reduced the highlight on her back. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:52, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Added more stripes to the tail to match apprentice and queen. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  18:46, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thicken the dorsal stripe a tad? It looks thinner than the other images

Thicken all of the stripes and smooth them out. The first in this set is the warrior, not the apprentice, kit, or queen. Also, the facial stripes need to come down past the eyes, and why they don't on the queen and kit is beyond me. (tldr; I designed this pattern, so I kinda know what I'm talking about)

Re-uploaded — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  11:44, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Roach (Ki) - For Approval
Cricket is a cute name. 21:24, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

could you smoothen the shading a tad and maybe lighten it some? —  Minkclaw   17:14, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:14, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Oliver (KP) ~ For Approval
Eww

Smoothen out the shading by the < eye :) 05:09, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out all the shading, imo.

Define the ear pink just a tiny bit 01:59, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Aspenfall (Star) - For Approval
what iz art? 20:28, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

White kind of looks gray. Also, define the texture, especially on the gray. 20:54, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the < earpink 20:57, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:31, January 22, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think he needs more spots on his flank. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  19:59, January 22, 2017 (UTC)

I still can't see the texture on the gray. 20:39, January 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:58, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Bluebellkit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Sorry if this looks bad, or I am doing something wrong. ;-; Fallenice the Great (talk) 23:59, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Maybe define the shading on the tail, legs, and back paw. 00:02, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Thanks Ivy! Fallenice the Great (talk) 00:08, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 00:32, January 24, 2017 (UTC)