Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 224

Curlfeather (Q) - Approved
Couldn't find any other chararts on her page so did whatever. 01:36, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

warrior and kit are here, please match them. Since I'm still around and the OA of the warrior, I'd like to keep the set the style it currently has. ​​​​

Reuploaded - Fixed everything. Copied every colour and every layer percentage of the warrior. Hopefully this looks good! 03:11, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading and add depth to it as well  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:00, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you make the texture on the main body curve more along the flank so that it doesnt look as flat? 11:21, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source, the face and tail suggest -> whilst the body looks other wise. Removing the shading from the back would probably fix the issue 11:38 Tue Apr 23 2019

Can you define the pupils? -- 22:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to keep as close as possible to the OA's, but put in the changes requested. 23:20, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you make it so that the texture flows naturally on the main body? criss crossing looks unnatural and doesn't match the other images

Reuploaded - Realised the mistake. I forgot to change the secondary texture. 23:30, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:45, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the facial and stomach shading could be smooth and lightened a tad. Compared to the rest its overly dark and doesn't look consistent with the rest.  Ellie  life is an illusion 06:51, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  03:08, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Its still pretty dark, the tail and legs seem way lighter. You might work with darkening those bits as I know it can be hard lightening up some areas.  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:53, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  11:36, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 22:46, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 22:45, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Rabbitfur (E) - Approved
tried to at least resemble beebs' style but this is a stark reminder of why i don't do classic tabbies 06:44, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you reduce the white on the chest and muzzle? 14:01, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:57, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:13, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Approved. 22:45, April 28, 2019 (UTC)