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Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120923200241!Shellyheart.png 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me.

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinx the power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.  Charlie  Let's   go to   Candy Mountain  02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

I couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows  call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/5/56/Giratina_orig.gif Crystals   over   Sparks  http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/2/27/Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. -- Đark ɦallows  06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? 20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on these? 00:44, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I am, I've just been having complications with it. My sincerest apologies :(  01:04, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front paws are still a bit too big, can you shrink them a bit? 19:37, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bump the closest eye up higher and smooth out the back. 20:32, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front left (my left) paw should be facing the front a bit more. It's on quite an awkward angle.  Millie  It's   all   black magic!  02:07, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The face looks...How do I put this? Flat-ishPikachushinx the power of the past 14:58, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, the face is fine. With the pose that it is in, the head would be angled that way, making the face appear that it looks kind of 'flattish'. 01:20, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? 17:56, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm trying, I really am, the anatomy just frustrates me at times because at this angle, it's difficult to get perfect  02:51, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

The front paw on this<--- side is still at an awkward angle. Could you please fix that? :3 02:57 Thu Oct 25

I'm going to feel horrible for critiquing this, because I'm Horrid at cat anatomy, and I wouldn't be able to do any better. Also, if I repeat anything from up there^ I did Not mean to. I would remove the line on the back, the legs look too thick, the paws I don't think should be wider than the legs themselves, the tail is crooked, as is the back leg closest to us, and to me the neck looks to short. -- 18:08, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Ashheart (W) ~ For Approval
Ashheart as a warrior. I don't think she looks too bad, especially since it was done on pixlr (stupid school computers won't let me download gimp). Comments? 14:20, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blend out the shoulder shading more, define the earpink, and make it a tad less blurry 16:08, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing. 16:51, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Earpink looks purple. Is earpink supposed to look purple? If it is, tell me, but as far as I know, needs fixing.Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:52, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if canges are showing. 17:01, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  20:16, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shading's fine, Feather. Earpink still looks purpley, but the changes do show.Pikachushinx the power of the past 21:10, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

No. The shading needs to be blurred.

Reuploaded 18:06, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading and darken the earpink. 18:55, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more depth to the shading? It looks flat right now. 19:35, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink so that it's more in the ear? 22:11, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:16, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, and more in the ear. Also, define and blur the shading. =3 12:39, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, and define the haunch shading too. Looking good. 08:34, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:41, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch highlight, if there is one.

Reuploaded 17:10, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 18:18, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, but can you define the shading and dull the chest highlight a tiny bit? 19:11, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The highlights were bothering me, so I got rid of them all together. 13:54, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Shading still looks flat. 18:36, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Double re-ups 17:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-ups again. The shading was bothering me. 15:11, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights and/or shading.

Rowanberry (Q) ~ For Approval
Her name, her description, mary-sue, in a good way <3 Comments? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:29, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller, and blur it 19:43, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

e.e I tried, stupid pixlr makes every bit of shading a hard time. When I blur it, it squares, when I change the size, it overlaps the sides. Ah, well, re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:51, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her face, please. =3 01:54, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I love the pattern, but it's unrealistic in the means that the design isn't formatted to the actual pelt of a cat. The pelt doesn't match up by bit and piece when the cat strikes a certain pose. All you need to do is shift a few pieces of the design like the legs, tail, and a tiny bit on the chest. Feel free to disagree though. 04:32, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, Teldy, but I'm inclined to disagree with this. I know a friend who had a cat with a similar pelt to this, and I think it is a possible pelt pattern, even though maybe slightly abnormal. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  10:14, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

What Teldy is talking about is that the pelt moves too perfectly. On the back legs, the pattern needs to be raised up. On the front legs, it need to be brought down, so that it looks more natural. Now the pattern looks like it just goes straight across; which is unnatural. 10:19 Fri Oct 12

Re-uploaded I changed the pelt style to make it more realistic :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:52, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The cream seems kinda pinkish. Was that intentional?

Yeah, the other cream colour I used didn't blend well, so I tried this one, and it looked slightly better. Also, I think if light catches it, it will reveal more creamy :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    16:17, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I think you'll need to change it. It looks skin-colored, and makes it seem like Rowanberry doesn't have cream and brown, but brown streaks of fur.

For a brown and cream cat, I was thinking something like either Molepaw or Ivystripe without the stripes (the forelegs and underbelly) or like a tortoiseshell. 16:33, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    17:30, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

She looks mottled, if you use pixlr, it's probably because of the blur tool, instead of using the blur tool, I'd suggest using the Gaussian Blur tool at a rate of ten. Also, the shading looks a bit hard-edged on her tail. By the way, this is beautiful. =D =3  22:02, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink 01:11, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the brown slightly darker because it looked a bit golden. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:08, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and fix the eyes and the earpink. 08:12 Sat Oct 13

The front leg closest to us, still looks mottled. 23:46, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can't see it mottled :s ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:11, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it. It's near the elbow. 21:17, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern still looks like it's been pasted on. It should curve and go with the body. o3o 00:11, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda gray on the cream. Maybe try and shade with dark brown instead of black 03:19, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shadig still looks hard-edged on her tail, can you blur it? x3 12:15, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:17, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, it looks a little bit paint-brushed on, still. 10:18 Thu Oct 18

Re-uploaded I've made it look more like the apprentice and I've darkened the brown. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    15:23, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes on the haunch connected. ^^  19:31, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    19:47, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it up a bit. 20:19, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten what up? o3o ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    11:57, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The entire image. It's a little too dark. .-.

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    15:09, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

She looks a bit gray right now... When Rowan said to lighten up the image, I believe she meant the colors(if I'm right), not really the image itself... (Hopefully you get what I'm saying, since I think I know what you did xD)  02:11, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is...lighter than it should be? o.O

Umm.. it looks black to me...? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:00, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's not black, it's an extremely dark grey. Please fix it. 08:15 Wed Oct 24

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ øṉε ώøɾlḋ, ṃαṉÿ αṉṡώεɾṡ  11:18, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, the colors really don't match her other images...

Rowanberry (W) ~ For Approval
I know this needs work, but I'm proud of her. :D Comments? 20:41, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:42, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the earpink. It looks like the tan bit on her ear. 22:38, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I'd rather not change the earpink because I got it from an .xcf, but if anyone else agrees I'll change it. 20:31, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be more visible. 00:24, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want me to define it some more? 20:07, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be lighter to match. 18:22, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ 20:30, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern on the haunch doesn't really match the apprentice. Could you shift the brown down the leg a few pixels?

Re-Ups^ 20:31, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Pattern still needs to be shifted, this time on the opposite side of what you did on the last upload. It looks too neat, and matches with the rest of the pattern way too much to be considered natural.

Re-Ups 21:45, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (W) - For Evaluation
My first PCA work. I tried to match the kit art... Comments? 17:52, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Dawn, this is /wonderful/ for your first PCA image. I'm very impressed.

Holy... O.O this is excellent. Define the earpink more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:26, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the texture a little and define the haunch shading. ^^ If you use GIMP, I can give you the xcf or if not, I can give you the exact colours I used. 22:39, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Improved?''' Thanks for the compliments. ^^ I do use GIMP, so that would be great help. (Although I probably should have asked from the beginning, heh...) 17:10, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the entire image and in between the legs. 22:17, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. I can hardly see the depth. 14:37, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Improved? 18:29, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but the paw shading needs to be thinner and you need to lighten the belly/chest shading and the midriff shading. 19:13, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Improved? 16:06, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad, and I think I will CBA this. c: 18:48, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:39, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more, especially in the back and neck, I'm having trouble distinguishing the texture in those areas. x3 This is beautiful! 20:01, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. ^^ 20:48, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Archeye (E) - CBA
Okay so this is the first image I've created on my Mac, so don't be shocked at the failness of it.... x.x 04:03, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

He needs patchy fur. 08:24, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes only just a tad 15:21, October 22,2012 (UTC)

Still working, Desmond? 11:28, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, re-uploaded. omgsobad  19:17, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

I dub this sexy. CBA?

Scorchwind (K) ~ For Approval
Well...I tried. x.x -- 18:00, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 18:01, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 18:09, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 07:35, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might now be showing -- 14:57, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten him up a bit to match the warrior? 20:38, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (A) - CBA
Ew. I tried, though. Comments for improvement? 17:31, October 21, 2012 (UTC)

I really don't know how to put this, but can you make the tail a bit smooter? 22:02, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? 02:25, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Yep. I tried for the tail. x.x 17:40, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur his chest and haunch shading just a tad? And I think a pink pixel from his earpink got on the left side of his head. o3o 18:45, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 18:57, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful <3 Let's go CBA~ 21:42, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (Alt Ki) - CBA
Comments? x3 03:03, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^^ 10:55, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

And blur it too 15:20, October 22,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just re-did the shading. I don't think changes are showing. =) 22:07, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define it a little more? 04:10, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:08, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck sahding a wee bit. Lovely. 14:04, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:24, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Another excellent image~

Boulder (A) - For Approval
Before you ask me to, no, I cannot make it look more like the warrior/rogue/whatever. Too many stripes for me to handle making it exactly the same, sorry. Second, I can't add anymore stripes. Where would I be able to put them? Other then that, comments?Pikachushinx the power of the past 12:22, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Well, you're going to need to make the stripes match a little better. They don't match as they are now. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice style, and if it were an individual style it would be good, but there's a specific pattern you have to match.

Still working? 10:37, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (Ki) - CBA
She wasnt easy at all, so ..ehm, yeah there she it, 14:08, October 23,2012 (UTC)

She needs a pink nose to match the apprentice. Wonderful job! 21:52, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Can you blur her (our) right paw along with her chest shading? 02:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, 12:17, October 24,2012 (UTC)

CBA? 21:45, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
First charat as a warrior~ Anyways, Skt helped me with this a lot last night, comments? 21:40, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the kit a bit more with the texture. Other tan that, great job! =D 21:48, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

You can just move one of the texture layers around a bit more and maybe mess around with the opacity. ^^ 23:06, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded First charart as a warrior and I don't spell charart right...x.x. Anyways, I think I made it worse..... 12:46, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

No, you didn't, Shoon. Just define the depth in the shading a tad. 18:57, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Great job, Lemony. But this more like a tabby. It needs to match more.--Cryptid Hunter93 (talk) 21:56, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Cryptid Hunter93

Clawface (Alt W)- Under Evaluation
Tried my best with that shading :P. Comments? Bbun (talk) 01:21, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur the shading. 01:22, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bbun (talk) 01:31, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Blur it some more and lighten the legs a little. 02:14, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong; but doesn't this need scars? <span style="">12:08 Tue Oct 23

Nope it doesn't, as he was mentioned as scarred in Into the Wild and this alt is from Yellowfang's Secret. 12:17, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ignore the waste in the backround, I'll remove them if that's the only thing I need to fix left Bbun (talk) 18:52, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Define the shading on the tip of the tail and lighten the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  вαʐïṉģα   19:01, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope the changes are showing :P Bbun (talk) 19:27, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

The file needs to be File:Clawface.warrior.alt.png.

You mean to be renamed or to be changed? Also I don't know how to "define" the tail tip so I'll leave it at that until more people complain. I'm focusing mainly on the waste now. Bbun (talk) 19:34, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There's some waste by his closest ear, his tail, and his paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Halloween!  20:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

When you define the tail tip's shading, you make it more visible. But I agree with Feather, it needs to be defined. 21:33, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

So where do I put the tail tip shading? And I already know about the waste. So that means I blur the tail tip shading along with the rest of the body? Bbun (talk) 21:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Do you have shading on the tail tip? Looking at it looks like there isn't any, so you could add it, Just make sure they are moth blurred equally. /hope this makes sense /horrible at explaining things. 23:47, October 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried at doing the tail shading. Ignore the waste- I'll clean it up later. Bbun (talk) 23:07, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Please change the file name to what I asked you earlier. You can ask 'Teldy to change it for you if need be.

Re-uploaded Teldy already fixed it, and tell me if the wasteless pic is showing. Bbun (talk) 23:46, October 24, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Can you connect the tail tip shading with the rest of the tail shading? It looks out of place with a blotch of unshaded fur. Oh, and I believe I see just a bit of waste near his tail tip. 01:17, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed tail shading and waste. Bbun (talk) 01:29, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

I see waste by the tail. 15:59, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if the new changes are showing. Bbun (talk) 18:19, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

There is still waste around the entire image. 18:39, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, this is at least the third time I've asked you. Use this file to upload your image. We follow a naming scheme here, and you need to follow it.

Fixed, I think. Bbun (talk) 19:14, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

No, still not fixed. Make sure to put all of the periods in. Also, there is waste all around the image, I believe. 20:27, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know how to make it file. Removed the waste. Bbun (talk) 22:27, October 25, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Cloudy told you how to do it... Define the leg shading a bit. 23:03, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail 23:32, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if there's any tail waste still showing. I uploaded this picture on the link Cloudy showed me. If there's anymore mistakes on this and if its uploaded wrong again, I'll upload it on the link she showed me. Bbun (talk) 16:55, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

It's still not right. Next time you save it as a .png on your computer, just make a copy with the correct name (Clawface.warrior.alt.png), and then make sure to change which image is up above. 18:07, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tell me if the changes are showing. Bbun (talk) 18:53, October 27, 2012 (UTC)Bbun

Hollyflower (Q) ~ For Apporval
My tenth orginal charart. 8D I'm pretty damn sure this matches; Rainly and Skt watched moi make it. owo Comments? <span style="">23:15 Thu Oct 25

It's fantastic 8D However, she's still cross-eyed. Fix the darling's eyes? 23:58, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading? This is awesome! 01:21, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think the gray should be a little darker.

Re-uploaded I think the eyes are right now. o3o Skye, the grey came from the warrior's .xcf, I didn't darken it, but I played around with the texture then redid the shading. <span style="">10:29 Sat Oct 27

It might be that there's less of the dark gry texture than the light grey. 10:53, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">08:50 Sun Oct 28

There's waste around the image. Also can you define the shading on the leg farthest away from us? 22:43, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Hollowbelly (MCA) ~ For Approval
bleh. Comments? 22:45, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

-casually withdraws to do something else- 23:00, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'd like to take this over. :3 00:37, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded. 00:56, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look purple to me, unless it's my comp. 10:38, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Fallowtail (Alt.Q) ~ For Approval
So....I tried to copy Birdsong's sorta style....comments? 23:34, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Defing the earpink. Beautiful, Skt. 23:38, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all of the mottly markings except the ones on her belly, they look blurred enough. 00:24, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Done and done. ` 01:08, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't this need a white belly and chest like Birdsong? -not sure- <span style="">10:25 Sat Oct 27

No, it doesn't mention anything about a white belly. 10:51, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head? 18:00, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:56, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Brightflower (W) - For Approval
Brighty no. 2 with squished face! Yay! Comments? 00:54, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

lol forgot white around the eyes 01:03, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the neck and shoulders, and expand that shoulder highlight? Pretty. :3 17:58, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:08, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Barkface (MCA) ~ For Approval
Meep.

Define the shading. 14:59, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think it's fine.

Mothwing (E) ~ For Approval
Uh, whoops. Sorry, accidentally ruined her :S Ah well, I tried x.x Oh, and I know I need to blur the stripes a bit a lot more, so I'll do that on the next reupload. 18:54, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match her existing pattern (her stripes do not branch off that much), I did not blur the stripes on her other chararts (I smudged them lightly, but that's it), add mottles, etc. If you want the original file for her MC charart just send me a message at neneshell@gmail.com. 19:20, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gah, I'll fix the dapples in the next upload. >.<  23:28, October 28, 2012 (UTC)

Newtspeck (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? <span style="">20:13, 27, 10, 2012

Could you blur the orange just a bit? IT looks a bit sharper than the other two images. 22:52, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink a bit too, love <3 04:54, October 28, 2012 (UTC)