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Cow(R) - For Approval
Alright, so unless it says in the books she was named after the apperance of a cow, I'm giving her the apperance of my cat since the last time I did that, the cat's description was magically changed by an author later on, so let's try this pattern again. The eyes are also a warmer green color but if they look too yellow I can tweak them a bit. But yeah, as always, if something's outta place then just tell me! I had fun with this  01:33, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her side just a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 04:42, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge (i assume thats what you did, judging by how it looks) the shading a lot more. I can /see/ the smudge marks... 10:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't smudge on Sai. She has fur texture  04:53, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Either way, I can see strange markings on the main body where I think the shading is meant to be. 13:42, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Yes, I plan on working on her tonight, offline has been kicking my ass  04:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  05:34, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but the white can stand to be smoothed out a little more. It looks sharp on the chest and the shading still looks a tad blotchy. 22:07, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

How/where is it exactly blotchy? 05:36, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

I guess just smooth it out in general

I think the image could be darkened a tad. 21:56, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Just a reminder here to not forget to upload! 02:56, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not, remember that I have obligations outside of the Wiki and I will reupload in the timeframe allotted   04:50, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  07:19, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Hate to break the CBA, but I think the dot on her hind leg can stand to be blurred/smudged a little more. 07:56, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Also, the forepaw closest to us looks kind of gray. 06:13, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

The chest can be smudged and the shading could be msoothed out some more. 13:50, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

I feel like the white should be smudged/blurred more, if you don't mind. 20:26 Thu Nov 26

I've already stated this, but I cannot smudge on Sai  08:58, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, maybe blur it then? Or use a different program? Or smooth it out in a different way, like add some on the edges on a lower opacity? 21:32 Fri Nov 27

I honestly think it's fine, and you guys are being way too picky. There is nothing wrong with having the white how it is; smudging isn't even mandatory on any image.

I agree it looks fine honestly. And iveh if you need help smudging in SAI i csn help c: 21:43, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Ok but even if the white was agreed to look fine, the part where the shading needs to be smoothed out is still not addressed. 02:25, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

And it still can be blurred. 05:51, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Why does it need to be blurred? If he blurs the shading, then you guys will start saying it's too flat and force him to define it. This shading is no different from shading on other images, and I really don't see any issues with it.

Reuploaded  19:09, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Because it looks really sharp and a tad blotchy. I still think it should be smoothed out a small bit more. 15:28, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Mistpelt (Star) - For Approval
tired lil elder cat 03:50 Fri Nov 13

sharpen and expand the shading

I don't think she should sharpen it but she could definitely blur it and expand it a lot. 07:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's like a dot in the far lower left corner? 13:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 02:35 Sat Nov 14

expand the shading everywhere, especially on the tail. Define the light on the legs.

reuploaded. redid shading again. idk if this is good or not 22:41 Tue Nov 17

Comments before approval? 01:01, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the shading depth could be defined a lot. It's looking a bit flat on the tail and forelegs.

There's a weird streak of pale texture on the tail.. mind fixing that? 21:47, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 03:06, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. redid shading. again. 03:18 Sun Nov 22

Comments before approval? 00:06, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the shading on the legs is still flat

it's fine. I took a look at her file and that's the best she can get it without having it look even worse. re-CBA? 05:44, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Nope. just because she can't do it, doesn't mean it's fine. please define it, it looks very flat. 04:55, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

that's what i've been trying to do for the past 3 uploads. can you possibly give me a hint on to how to deepen it then? cause nothing i'm doing seems to work. 01:41 Wed Nov 25

Perhaps add a new layer of thinner, darker shading?

I can't see where the light source is. Could you define it? 20:25 Thu Nov 26

reuploaded tried a new light source. 22:51 Fri Nov 27

I'm going to be that person but I seriously still can't see any shading on the face and legs. :x

Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink into the pelt, it looks like it cuts off very abruptly. 23:07, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Gooseberry (Q) - CBA
the base itself is actually really pale... if I lighten the image too much more, I don't think I'm going to be able to see it, so please keep that in mind. Base =/= stripes, and I think you can have darker stripes on a paler base.

Define the head shading a tad? Lovely. ~Russettail13

Re-uploaded.

define the shading on the legs 02:43, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading everywhere. My macbook shows everything darker and I still can't see it on the screen. 11:16, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I am not used to this color in the least.

If you could, perhaps define the facial shading a little bit? I cannot see any shading on my screen. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:15, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is a very difficult color to shade.

Define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us? And if possible, could you define the facial shading some more? Perhaps adding some depth might work? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:14, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded. If someone could give me some shading color advice, that would be appreciated. I'm currently using an orange-brown, but are there other colors that would work better? (just not green ;;; )

Maybe just black? :P Can you smudge the earpink a little? Sorry if this seems nitpicky. 18:44, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

use dark red. it's really good for golden cats.

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Shading might be a tad flat in places, but I like this coloring much better.

Could you thicken it on the tail a little? 03:23 Sun Nov 22

Re-uploaded.

Comments before approval? 00:05, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, the shading could stand to be defined on the legs as it looks on the tail and belly. By that i think i mean add some depth 11:49, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, but you do know that shading thickness, definition, darkness, ect, doesn't need to be the same throughout the entire image, right?

I'm going to be that person but I seriously still can't see any shading on the face, and legs

And I don't understand how you can't see anything. My laptop and phone both show tons of shading. If I tweak this again, I'm going to be in the same boat as the first time I redid the shading, and it feels like I'm going in circles. =/

Sharpening the facial shading and the leg shading might help with the visibility issue. I can't really see it either. 07:25, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I already talked with Fox about that and I hate the sharpen tool.

Try adding a layer of shading depth in black, or maybe add some highlights. It is still pretty hard to see... 11:43, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. >.>

Too many issues. Withdrawing.

I'll take over

re-ups

Could you smoothen the shoulder shading? Also, I believe there is some shading leaking out from there. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:07, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading? 20:23 Thu Nov 26

re-ups~

Comments before approval? 15:28, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Echosnout (Star) ~ For Approval
The MC is hard to match. 23:33, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white parts a lot, and smudge the earpink a little more. 00:17, Nov. 21, 2015 (UTC)

for some reason the eyes look strange to me... Maybe define the gradient of them?

Reupload I tried moving the pupil's away from the lighter part of the eye. 19:48, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the main body shading a bit? 17:22 Sun Nov 22

Smudge the black a bit more.

Reupload 19:18, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

define your light source on the chest

You mean cover the light spot? It's usually fine with other images, and the light source is coming from the <---. 04:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

if it's coming from <== there, then the leg shading is in the wrong place. Switch it, please.

No, the light source is coming from there. The shading will be ==> that way then. 07:45, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ahh, I see. I thought you meant that the light was hitting <== this way. But that means the chest shading is in the wrong direction. Perhaps flip that around?

I'm sorry I'm still confused. 20:41, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Just swap the position of the chest shading around. 23:30, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I think I understand what you mean now. 07:29, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Note quite. This is what I meant for you to do with the chest: http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283593286300.png

Reupload Like that? 19:40, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you get rid of some of the shading on <== side of the chest? Now the whole chest looks shaded, whereas part of the chest on that side should be in light like Fox's image shows. 21:53, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:21, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the white, like on the mc? 20:22 Thu Nov 26

Reupload 20:57, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

define the facial shading

Reupload 00:58, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the black parts of the body. 04:09, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

This is optional, but could you add some shading to the chin? It looks oddly bright. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:56, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Moss Tail (ES) ~ For Approval
Tis who has done terrible tinted shading and shall never do thy again? Tis I has done the job and tis failed terribly. 17:00, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on the overall body?--Dewsplash (talk) 17:12, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is just horrifying 17:31, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading? 17:33, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

I can't tell if it's the shading or not, but he looks awfully green.

I see red, Maybe change the shading tint to blue of black? 18:00, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up im cring in le inside. 21:49, November 24, 2015 (UTC)

The tail is looking a little bit flat. If the tail's supposed to be in entire shadow, perhaps add some depth to it. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:06, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? 20:20 Thu Nov 26

re-up wait a second, i need to go flip a table   15:22, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shattered Ice(ES) ~ For Approval
About half of the time I spent of this image was on shading. 15:06 Wed Nov 25

Define the shading on the stomach & tail? Lovely! Sorry about commenting on the shading >3<   15:18, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! <span style="">16:45 Wed Nov 25

Expand and define shading i can hardly make it out 17:58, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'll probably be told to lighten it, but whatever. <span style="">3:11 Thu Nov 26

The lightness looks ok to me. But perhaps smooth it out - I can see the smudge lines very, very clearly. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:15, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I swear, I did actually smudge the shading on every layer, even if it looks pretty similar to what it looked like before. <span style="">14:36 Thu Nov 26

dont smudge it all horizontally - smudge it to the direction of the fur flow

It's intended to be smudged in the direction of the fur... Where did I mess up? <span style="">15:28 Fri Nov 27

It does look rather horizontal, instead of flowing into the direction of the fur. 02:21, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried <span style="">3:15 Sat Nov 28

Could you lighten up the facial shading just a tad? ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:55, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (es) ~ For Approval
I set title as evaluation since i dont know if anyone promoted me to an apprentice, I actually like this! 15:58, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. This is just a personal preference, but the eyes look slightly cross-eyed. Perhaps fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:04, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

You already had one image approved, so you should very much be an apprentice, hence why I'm changing it now. Sorry about not being able to give you the file; I've been really busy the past two days or so. x.x It doesn't look like you quite need it though.

re-up Thanks Snowed and Blossom! 05:40, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear. Very nice! 06:16, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Thank you Bluestar! :) 16:00, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

there's some waste around the torn ear. <span style="">18:14 Fri Nov 27

re-up :J 18:19, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Nettlebreeze (Star) - For Approval
Shaggy old guy :D

Ooh, beautiful. The shadow on the chest is contradicting to the light source. Perhaps you could swap that around? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:03, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:42, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Man, I love his eyes. Can you smooth out the shading on his arms? 20:56, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks c: 14:16, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Swift Minnow (ES) - For Approval
This has faint texture on it, correct? Because my monitor's being weird, and I can't really tell too well. 21:35, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

yes it does but its much more blurred than that. yours tbh kinda looks like she's got visible veins. Also could you smooth out the shading some more? 23:36, November 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred the texture and shading. Already this image is a nightmare, especially given I can hardly see what I'm doing. What is wrong with my monitor?? 01:10, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

could you blend the arm/hind leg shading a little bit? cute! <span style="">22:38 Fri Nov 27

Re-uploded. 13:31, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Red Claw (ES) ~ For Approval
03:17, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

I doubt you need it, but would you like the file or either his rogue or loner? (I can always shoot it to you in the morning) The colors and texture are a bit....misleading, to say the least. =P If you don't want it, that's fine, although would you mind softening the texture a little bit? it's not quite as distinctive on his other images.

Define the light on the face

Morning Fire (K) - For Evaluation
My first charart - I'm also not sure if I got the right template, and if I didn't, I'm sorry because I got a little confused on her page. Thanks. Comments? Misty~ (talk) 07:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's dark brown - darken the color please.

Re-uploaded (I think this is how you do it? Sorry, I'm new to all of this...) Misty~ (talk) 07:22, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

that's exactly what I wanted you to do. Darken it some more, and I'll promote you into an apprentice, since you clearly know what you're doing.

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing at the moment though (For me at least). And thanks

Morning Fire is such a cool name. Can you make the earpink less neon please? 13:49, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please. Very nice! 14:30, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Misty~ (talk) 03:21, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the color could be darkened. Look at Moss Tail's charart for some reference.

Re-uploaded Is it a bit too dark now..? Misty~ (talk) 05:21, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Again. Changes weren't showing. Misty~ (talk) 10:53, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink, it look way too neon. Perhaps color pick from an existing image?

Re-uploaded Misty~ (talk) 03:41, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the shading a lot more. She seems a little.. green on my screen. 09:27, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't look green to me, but can you lighten the shading a lot? 17:32, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Misty~ (talk) 22:25, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading in between the legs a little more. 23:17, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Misty~ (talk) 23:57, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

One Eye (DF) - For Approval
easy pattern easy thanksgiving 09:08, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

There's no cite for this on his page. Declining until a cite is added. Remember, someone saying they think he could have founded the Dark Forest, or have been the first cat in it, doesn't mean it's true. It needs to be 100% certain.

Okay, nevermind. Wikia's showing the previous version on the page again. This is what happens when cache isn't cleared and all that fun stuff again.. >.>

maybe make his fluffier around the neck, legs, and tail? Gorgeous! 13:54, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

There is no cited description that his neck and tail have to be extremely fluffy, it just needs to be knotted, which I think I have done, and his fur style doesn't need to match 100% with the other images, but thanks thou 14:04, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Can you define the shading everywhere? 15:07, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste on his tail.--Dewsplash (talk) 17:06, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

can you thicken some of the lines of ragged fur if possible? 18:12, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

There's a smudge of gray at the paw closest to the right.

Re-uploaded. I only thickened the ragged fur on the outside, cause if i did on the inside it would just be big blotches of pure black (I tried it, believe me). 02:34, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Slate (Star) ~ For Approval
I love this girl. In case you're wondering, I didn't add the scar as I felt you wouldn't be able to see it from this angle. If someone disagrees, though, I'll add it. 17:04, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry but honestly this cite for her being in starclan is invalid, as kate only says "i think they would be pretty chill in starclan" that does not confirm anything whatsoever that slate is in starclan at the current commented moment. Nor is "think" something that means "yes". 18:05, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't that mean that Slash and friends/One Eye don't get DF images? Because all she said was "yes, those cats would make fabulous Dark Forest cats!", not that they are in the DF. Also, the "yes" was in reply to a "Do you think" comment, not a "Are they in the DF?". <span style="">21:20 Fri Nov 27

Well, given that the "yes" was to the Dark Forest comment, not to Slate, I think it applies. The comment towards Slate said that they'd get along in StarClan, not that Slate died or anything...

Yeah, but the Dark Forest comment was "do you think these cats are in the DF", not "are these cats in the DF". Not that any of that applies to Slate's image. I just feel like the DF "yes" is kinda invalid, considering how the question is phrased. But I am rather new to the wiki and do not know everything that is considered a valid cite, so just ignore this comment if I'm wrong. <span style="">21:29 Fri Nov 27

Uh but it's Kate's answer that is valid, not my question, judging by that, a ton of cites are going to be nullified? And she flat out said "yes" in regards to my question. 02:11, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

But the question was "do you think" and thus yes meant "yes, I think so". I dunno, that's how I interpret it. <span style="">3:17 Sat Nov 28

can you bring this stuff to pc, it doesn't belong here. 05:18, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Dew Nose (ES) ~ For Approval
18:41, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Just brighten up the white a tad on the nose and tail? --Dewsplash (talk) 18:46, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad thicker on her kit image.

Willow Tail (Star) - For Evaluation
Bleh, I'll probably redo the shading later. Stoatskip (talk) 19:23, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, that's better. Stoatskip (talk) 20:14, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps try blurring the stipes? Nice. Misty~ (talk) 22:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

could you also add some depth to the shading on the main body? it looks a little flat. the eyes are beautiful, by the way! <span style="">22:36 Fri Nov 27

Thicken the stripes - they look way too thin.

Re-ups Thank you! Stoatskip (talk) 14:33, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think you still need to blur the stripes more. Misty~ (talk) 01:37, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes more tapered.

Bee (DF) ~ For Approval
not the BEES 19:53, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

define shading, beautiful <3 01:39, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 05:28, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little more? <span style="">14:05 Sat Nov 28

not without mmaking the pale parts invisible, no. and i think its already plenty visiible. any more will make it look green. 16:29, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Slash (DF) - For Approval
I hate this so much. Jesus I hate this 03:11, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a little more. This looks really nice! 03:18, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the white; it looks rather gray. Nice job. 03:51, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the stomach. 04:07, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on the face. Nice! Misty~ (talk) 04:35, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

The color appears to be lighter on the rogue image. ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:54, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (Star) ~ For Approval
good afternoon.

<wails and rolls on the floor> I never got to do an image of (one of) my favorite cat! This is amazing though... define the facial shading a bit more~?

Define the depth of the shading on the paws? This looks nice! o.o ~ Blossomstream Best Song Ever 10:53, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

the chest and paws should be white, and even if they are, they look too tinted. 11:20, November 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks guys <3 The chest and paws are white, I tried to add highlights and erase some of the shading.