Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Gorsepaw (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was BlueOrca, tweaked for white looking gray/flat shading. 17:42, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

lighten the shading on the body some, I can't see the stripes through it anymore. 23:41, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 23:50, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the white 02:21, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot.

'''Re-uploaded. 22:06, November 17, 2014 (UTC)'''

His back paws are pinkish looking instead of white. Make them more white. Very nice though! ^^  02:11, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Toadstep(Star) - Tweaked
needed b+w tail oa was breezeheart and ivy 02:23, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Can you get rid of the two middle white parts on his tail? The warrior doesn't show anything but a top and bottom part of white on his tail, and they'd show up there if Jayie had added them.

whoops, re-uploaded 02:33, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Also, the whole tail tip should be white, not just the top half of it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:39, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

And it's the underside of the base of the tail that should be white, not the top. Sorry to nag. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:44, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Brightspirit (Star) - Redone
obvious who the OA is so yeah.

Define the shading a tad? Oooh, she looks like her mom now. 07:03, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Those were my plans, tbh.

Define it a bit more on the legs? Yeah, I figured 16:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it pretty well, and I'm afraid if I define it more, then the shading's gonna end up messing with the stripes. If someone else agrees, though, I'd gladly tweak it. Mainly just because if I define it, I'll either need to darken it or unblur it, and this shading does not look pretty unblurred.

Billystorm (KP) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA is Shelly. Tweaked for flat shading. 21:58 Mon Nov 17