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Pink Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ohlook. 22:32 Tue Apr 7

I think the white needs to be brightened quite a bit. He looks too...yellow? StormSongz (talk) 22:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

the white is fine, actually. nice job, hawky 23:16, 04/7/2015 Looks great. If you need to, define shading. User talk: Dewdrops66/talk > 25:23, 04/7/2015

Hawky, Perchpaw isn't archived. I'll archive it this time, but if you post something without waiting again, it will be declined on the spot. 00:05, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

can you maybe layer some blue over his eyes? from what I know albinistic cats have blue eyes that look red, not just red. 03:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah see I was going to make the eyes blue but I wasn't sure if you'd be able to see the red in the pupils. 22:13 Wed Apr 8

...Can you guys tell the shading is defined? I feel like I don't see it so I might define it some more... but idk. 22:14 Wed Apr 8

Define the light on then back legs, please. 00:09, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

His eyes are too, blue. We have no cite for it, anyways. User talk: Dewdropps56/talk > 6:42, April, 9, 2015( UTC)

and no cite for red eyes either, and albinistic cat eyes arent pure pink theyre blue with a pink tint, like humans I believe. ._. maybe tint it a little bit pink if it doesn't look purple, though. 13:45, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

The pupils are dark red - which I can lighten to make it more pinkish. I can't do much with the eyes because pixels don't allow much detail in them. Also, the eyes are technically artist's choice, so idk about that. If I make them any pinker they may turn purple. However, I could add a pink dot instead of a blue one, so it would be blue, pink, blue. idk you can tell me. I will get to the light definition in my next upload. 22:33 Thu Apr 9

yeah true, and I think that would be a good idea actually. 10:13, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 0:27 Sat Apr 11

Define the light on the back leg furthest away from us. 12:23, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

With my light source there wouldn't be much light there. 23:59 Mon Apr 13

Minnow (R) ~ For Approval
I'm trying something new for me so paws crossed it works. 03:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur or smudge the gray 03:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I also defined the texture, cause you couldn't really see it. 06:10, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot, please.

Blur the gray more and define the shading more 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can't see it. misread fox's comment at first, didn't notice the last bit 10:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload The white is pure white, it's the shading. For that reason, I won't darken the shading anymore. 22:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define doesnt automatically mean darken. I'd suggest you try to unblur/unsmudge the shading some, because i still can't see it. Also, to brighten up the white, perhaps try using pure white highlights? Its not mandatory, so that part is up to you. 05:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Not exactly sure how to do that, but I've just redone the shading altogether so that it's covering more of the gray fur. Look much better. 05:39, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Much better. :) Define the shading on the tail? 07:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:34, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth on the tail? it looks flat. 10:14, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define all the shading except on the legs? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:52, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:43, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define light on the tail 11:05, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't really any lighting there, since it's behind the body from where the light source is. You want me to add light and if so where? 23:30, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

If you are not adding light then add some shading depth, since the tail looks a little flat. 12:22, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Okay if that doesn't work can I have some advice? 22:29, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs a little? 15:45, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:55, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Cricket (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ew ._. But hey I got my uploader working again. K so I would rather not darken the shading too much more as it starts to looks really yucky with the base colors. Comment away~ 13:04, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. It shouldn't look too bad, imho. Is it tinted, or did you use black? Either choice is good, and I know black on ginger or orange cats looks pretty wicked.

Should he be short furred? Slate said that they are completely different. Just a suggestion!User:Dewdrops56/talk, 8:25, April, 8, 2015

Re-uploaded. Lol I actually used black, even though I had serious thoughts about tinting it, but I decided to give it a chance. And Dewdrops, I think Slate was talking about their personalities rather than their fur length, kind of like Squirrelflight and Leafpool. 19:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add more shading to the back of the neck and upper shoulder? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:01, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did a couple other things too. 14:10, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Did you fill in the nose? I can't tell. Also blur/smudge the main body shading juuuust a tad.

Re-uploaded. Yeah. I brightened the pink in it. 12:47, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reed (Ro) - For Approval
20:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? Looking nice :) 05:01, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the overall shading- It may just be my monitor, but i can barely see any. 05:14, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

He looks so fluffy! O-O 13:55, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed, define overall shading, and lighten the silver maybe a touch? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:04, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups I tinted the shading,i hope it helps :p 09:55, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs furthest from us? Pretty! 13:50, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks :) 15:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 15:42, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 00:14, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you lighten him up a bit? He looks too dark to be a silver tabby. 20:51, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Brindlekit (TAQ) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay... comments? 20:41, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit more? And define the earpink a bit as well? Otherwise I love her! 22:27, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 22:31, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

This is so beautiful O.O define the light on the tail? 00:17, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a touch more, and define the shading a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:04, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Fox! =) 21:10, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks good! 00:29, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! =D I really appreciate it but please give some criticism next time as non-critique comments are considered spam. 01:27, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a lil bit? So cute! 13:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! 14:06, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. With this source, there should be some. 04:21, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 20:34, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smokekit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I actually like this wow 19:23, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, if there is any. Looks lovely. c: 19:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. Its probably my monitor or its probably really hard to see. 13:58, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:16, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 09:40, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded That's as far as I'll define it - anymore, and it wouldn't look right. 23:47, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of light to the chest and define the light on the face? 02:43, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shadepaw (A) ~ CBA
21:59, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Looks too black, or maybe it's just my POV. User: Dewdrops56/ talk 15:21, April, 10, 2015

Re-uploaded. Could've just been the shading, I lightened it a little. 22:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

It's still black on my screen. Maybe lighten the base, too? Also, can you define the earpink? 23:31, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with the above; it looks like solid black. I'm having a hard time seeing the initial pelt color. 00:22, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Hopefully it's still dark brown. 00:30, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, it's dark brown, and much better! Define the earpink some more. Looking good! 00:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! I think the earpink looks fine. 01:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading around the face. This is purrtyyy! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:14, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten it up everywhere and blur it tons. 10:38, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and back legs. Good job! 13:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's just me, but I'm still having a hard time seeing the ear pink. Maybe lighten it a tad? 13:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Looks way better now! I can actually see the pelt color. Maybe define ear shading, though? User: Dewdrops56/talk 7:08,April, 11,2015

Re-uploaded.  16:35, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Looks better! 18:22, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Noticed some waste on the back, I don't know how I missed that. 18:45, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 08:15, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
I was so happy when Thrush was approved. I'm going to try to get this one approved aswell :) 22:54, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little, maybe lighten it too. 23:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

The base colour doesn't look right. this is the base colour I used for the warrior. 23:47, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Red-did the shading postion.. base colour.. and raised the lightness of the shading. 01:54, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit unless someone says otherwise. (Sorry, I'm tired and I'm making some errors tonight). ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 06:16, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink does need to be dulled down, indeed. Smudge it more too so that it doesn't look so hard edged. and while you're at it, blur the shading more. 09:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

This needs to be renamed into File:Appledusk.star.png 10:37, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit. 13:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

i think its fine. 13:46, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Renamed.

re-up bloop? 13:55, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe get rid of some of the shading on the side of the nose facing the light source, as well as the muzzle. It wouldn't be shaded there. 15:49, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 22:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking where the tail meets the side. 01:39, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is leaking away from the linear art 01:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 02:15, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail please 09:41, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to it soon. I just got over sickness ;-; Tuesday Apr 14 20:55 (UTC)

Sleekpaw (A) ~ CBA
very sleek very shiny 13:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I love the texture! Very interesting. Define the ear pink just a bit? And maybe the belly shading? 15:38, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, do you mean define? I think the tail shading could be defined a little. I like this, she looks like she's grinning lol 09:43, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded her texture started out as a boredom project ngl, and sleekpaw is a very happy cat apparently 19:23, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

yeah hi its been like 3 days can I have a comment or something 03:15, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Uh it hasn't been three days, so could you please be patient? I'll CBA this, since I can't see anything wrong with it. 04:39, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Petalkit (MV) (Star) - For Evalutation
My first charart. Horrible texture, I know... ♨ Little   Latte  ♨ 14:42, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front paws. This is very good =). 15:29, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups thank you =) 21:39 Sat Apr 11 21:39, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smduge the texture on the tail. Lovely 22:41, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

^^And on the paws and head, (It seems like texture so thats why Im asking) 22:43, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I don't think changes are showing. here 23:40 Sat Apr 11 23:40, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The lines could still be smudged a lot more. 00:30, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 13:17 Sun Apr 12

Define the light on the front legs and the tail. 19:09, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

re-up erm... I won't be able to update because of school, sorry 23:17 Mon Apr 13

Reedshine (MV) (Q) ~ For Approval
My first charart! I hope you guys like it. I worked real hard on it. Okay...comments? 15:20, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe this should be "For Evaluation". Other than that, I find it good! ♨ Little   Latte  ♨ 15:26, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

*fixed*  15:28, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

blur the belly shading, and don't align your images. looking good. 15:30, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:32, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The stomach shading could still use blurring 00:31, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

I love this. Maybe smooth out the tail shading. I still love this >.< 01:42, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Thanks guys! 02:08, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the leg furthest away from us 09:15, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

And I'll promote you into an apprentice, since you seem to know what you're doing 13:05, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll work on it as soon as I get home from work :3 13:15, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 19:43, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

She looks like a burnt orange X3 I think the ear pink should be defined a little bit, Perhaps shift some colors around? 07:49, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ikr! She looks so adorable~ 11:12, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Had to fix the ear pink shadow. 11:14, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly add more flecks to the back? Lovely job. 12:59, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added more flecks! 14:26, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Me no like. ;-; (Did the image align? or did I misname? I can't tell)

Smooth out the shading on the back, define the hind leg shading, define the eye depth, and blur the earpink just a tad. Looks nice, other than that. 18:51, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. 18:56, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Redone Don't know if changes are showing.

Blur/smudge the shading more, and smooth it out. It's looking a bit blotchy right now. 23:44, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have no idea why this didn't happen when I did Spiketail. Probably because I'm used to setting it to at least 20/25

Define the shading on the legs. Those eyes look sexy X3 09:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit? 12:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened shading and tried to define a bit but I don't know if I can see it. By the way, when you said define shading on legs, did you mean all? And thanks about the eyes, Foxy :P  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:38, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah define the shading on all four legs :p 13:39, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on all four legs. 02:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lizardtail (W) ~ For Approval
So here is my first character. Yes, I don't know how to do texture... ✿Bird ride23✿  Colorful world is around me  19:01, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink? I can't see it. This is beautiful for your first charart! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Defined the earpink. I think it looks more beautiful. ✿Bird ride23✿  Colorful world is around me  20:18, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

The file names need to be the same. When you re-upload, you overwrite the image. Also, it has to be a .png file named Lizardtail.warrior.png. (sorry if I sound harsh, I don't want to sound mean ;~;) Though I said define last time, could you blur/smudge the earpink just a little bit?

Re-ups - This? ✿Bird ride23✿  Colorful world is around me  22:34, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe let some more light shine on the tail where there's a lot of shading near the base; towards the light source. (Erase some shading) 12:55, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the light on all four legs/paws :) 12:59, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ✿Bird  ride23✿  <font color="Violet">Colorful world is around me  13:50, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

You must add texture, it's to match her apprentice. Just use the airbrush and run over your image 14:10, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I've added texture. I think it looks a bit ugly but i tried... ✿Bird ride23✿  <font color="Violet">Colorful world is around me  13:50, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smoother the texture by studying it. A lot. It shouldn't look really hard like that. It should look really really soft. :) 19:47, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

lol now there's too much light on the legs. Add some more shading? 20:07, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Quiet Rain (Star) ~ CBA
WHEE 8) 8) 8) 01:50, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! Could you add a white-flecked muzzle and ragged fur, which she's being nominated for right now? Also, maybe define the shading a touch? 01:53, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

When she joined starclan It said she looked "sleek and young" so I don't think she would need those, I'll define the shading. thanks 8) 01:54, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupped 8) 01:58, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen the shading on the face? Gorgeousss 02:10, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't have a back stripe, and she needs stripes on her forelegs. 03:16, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uppd 09:13, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

I love this! Maybe brighten the ear pink just a tad? 12:57, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped i don't want to brighten it up, I color picked from her other images. I deleted some of the shading though. and thanks~ 13:01, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the main body shading.

My beauty. I don't think she has "black eye circles" if you get it Burnt :P. Is it just the shading? She's so beautiful 01:40, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped It was shading, but I removed most of it cause it looked like she had makeup on lel 02:55, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

This is a very lovely lady. CBA? 02:46, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Larkwing (Alt. MC) - For Approval
had to redo that retro shading 14:58, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

This is lovely. Define the light on the front leg farthest from us as well as put some shading on the back of the ear farthest from us? There's also some waste by the ear closest to us at the tip as well as below the herbs by the chest. 15:55, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! 16:52, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Unless he's called gray-and-white, I'm sorry, but the white will need to be removed. As far as I've noticed, he's only called a gray tabby in Mapleshade's Vengeance. You can also change them to pale parts, if you'd like. Also, define the light on the legs.

Re-uploaded. I changed it quite a bit, mostly because I couldn't make the light grey work with the pale stripes. 15:20, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a bunch, as I can't see the pattern through it. Very pretty ! 19:30, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:14, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Alder (Ro) ~ For Approval
Love you 19:01, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

I love her white splashes! Darken the shading a bit? And define the light on top of her back; if the light source is where you're claiming it to be, then there wouldn't be shading there. 19:41, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

I See where her source of light is coming from, so I think it's fine though would you mind defining the shading on the legs and the tail? 19:45, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Also I don't know if it's just me, but when I zoom in really close, there's waste all around the image? 19:47, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see waste.

Erm, the gray and white on Alder is more of a flecked thing. I know it's kinda hard to see, but what I essentially did is take a gray base and just use a smaller flecked brush to make the white- they're not patches. Her pelt was said to look like snowfall, to a point, so that's what I did.

Reups There was no chance of any waste - I cleared each layer with the wand tool thrice to make sure. Also, Jayce, I've tried to make it look more snowfall-y. 21:44, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe it was just how far I zoomed in lol. Add a bit more shadow to the hind leg farthest from us? 22:29, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 17:29, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sun Shadow (Ro) ~ For Approval
Idk.

Define the light on the flank? 20:34, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

The base for him is approx. #0A0A0A. Pick from the loner, as that is the first image in the set. (I posted first, so it's my shade they should all match)

I thought he has blue eyes. 01:36, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

No, we didn't have a cite for his eye color, and now we do- it's not blue or green or whatever one I picked.

I just saw he has amber eyes :P 09:40, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Changed the base color to #0A0A0A and tried to define the light on the flank. Black cats are so hard. u.u

Yarrowpaw (A) ~ For Approval
beauty grace united states 19:55, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on everywhere but the face.

make the base more ginger, I thought he was brown at first. 04:06, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

/He/ looks so much like Rosetail/paw! Define the light on his shoulder. 09:41, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 19:07, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur/something the stripe on the close ear? 15:41, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 22:51, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Bloomheart (W) - For Approval
All I can think of is Apple Bloom.

I love the stripes! It reminds me of The Nightmare Before Christmas... Add a bit of shading on the back of the ear farthest from us? 23:13, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That's one of my favorite movies tbh.

Lmao I remember when I was younger, I was so scared of it for obvious reasons :p Define the shading on the tail if there is any? Also possibly darken the shadow on his neck just a tad? 23:20, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Of course there's tail shading- it's just really hard to keep it defined on these blanks.

I love that movie <3 define the shading on the ear furthest from us. Lovely job! 19:28, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the earpink a liiiiittle bit? 15:40, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

I see it just fine. I think it needs smudging or blurring some. 19:02, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh.

Thistle (K) ~For Evaluation
My First Charart! How did I do? 23:39, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Looks nice for a first! 23:43, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

He'll need stripes, as we operate on the "all ginger cats have stripes" ruling, unless they are specifically called solid.

done hmm? 00:01, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ummm, he looks golden to me... Russettail13 (talk) 00:20, April 13, 2015 (UTC)Russet

done He is supposed to be ginger,not golden, so I made him ginger :P 00:22, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Looks too golden, still. A bit more orange ginger, please? User: Dewdrops56/talk 17:23, April, 12, 2015

done Ginger enough?? 00:31, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink 02:55, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

done I think the earpink looks better... I'm having a hard time redoing the earpink scine the image isn't showing up in layers... 20:10, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Any comments? 19:23, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Please wait three days before asking for comments- it's barely even been two. Make him more ginger, please- he still looks really golden.

Clovertail (Ki) ~ For Approval
First Character! I color-picked and tried to match the queen… 00:10, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is good for a first though... 00:16, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the ear pink a bit more, I think this looks good for your first 00:22, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Redid the shading completely 00:30, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

add more shading to the back foot. Lovely! When I tried this the shading looked too blue on the white! 00:34, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups the back foot is not supposed to have shading, so I just blurred it more… hope it's more obvious 00:39, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste around the back foot. 00:40, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Yeah, I forgot to remove the waste 00:41, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and blur the ear pink more 02:54, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 03:26, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? I can't see it. (Sorry, I know you already blurred it >.<) This is ''adorable! '' ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:42, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks ^^ 08:26, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Im promoting you to an apprentice and changing the heading since you obviously know what your doing. Define the tail shading, please. 00:03, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (Q) ~ For Approval
It's nowhere as good as this 02:53, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the tail stripes some more. 04:15, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:05, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sumdge the dorsal stripe of her tail tip^^ She's gorgeous 12:23, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 12:55, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

I think the main part of the tail stripe should actually be more centered in the middle of the tail... I'm not sure, but I think that's what should be done- I see it more often than not towards the middle of the lineart, instead of against the lineart.

Re-uploaded 07:52, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

The dorsal stripe gotta be thicker than that. 10:13, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:20, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Move the dorsal stripe on her tail a couple pixels more to the right. And lessen the white under the tail if the stripe is closer to the middle; you wouldn't see that much of her underbelly white on her tail if that's the case. Also smudge the tail stripes some more. Looking good! 14:05, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrow Fur (Ro) ~ For Approval
She took me well, around three and a half hours. *shrug*  what kind of tortoise shell is this 15:37, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

she doesn't quite match - would you like the .xcf for the kit? i also had one ready for the rogue so feel free to look at it to see how her pattern would go on that blank o3o 18:32, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Beebs. Can someone link the kit pic to see the correct pattern? The kit seems more paler. User: Dewdrops56/Talk 15:02, April, 13, 2015

Beebs it'll be lovely to have it - I just don't know how exactly does she look like from the side. Should I make the splotches smaller? 23:41, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

It needs more shading on the belly. Like curl the shading from the edges of the legs upward. 23:43, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

'''Umm is this better? Slightly??''' 10:10, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

idk the kit seems to look lighter 11:00, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups, if it made any differences at all >.> 11:54, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Much better bramble! Get rid of the shadow on the tip of her tail and move it instead on the back/bottom of her tail tip 13:44, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the white, pale, creamy fur on her body seem more... white, pale, and creamy?and blur the shading more at the feet. 19:07, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

I personally think the tail shading is...fine, since that I pretty much copied it from some other images. If somebody agrees with you Storm I'll do that. I'll smudge the shading more later when I get home:) 23:52, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere, and lighten it a few ticks. 04:41, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  10:12, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the shading more? Especially on the chest tail tip and face 14:53, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Slash (Ro) ~ For Approval
Holy cow I spent like five hours on this 15:37, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

0.0 it's totally worth it <3. Define the light/shading more clearly? I can't really tell which direction it's coming from. 00:34, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (Ro) - For Approval
All colors came from his warrior and med. cat. Comments? 02:32, April 15, 2015 (UTC)


 * lol just noticed I forgot about the waste on the chest, I'll get that next upload 02:37, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Since he was named for the white blob on his chest, shouldn't it be rounder? More "pebbleish"? Also, the stripes on his med image seems more... sharp? They're more less bent but folded instead if that made any sense at all   Handsome, btw^^ 02:44, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think the stripes are fine: I used the same pattern as in the warrior and med. cat. Also, because his chin his tucked in this pose, the top of the round splotch will be obscured. 06:49, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

But it looks a bit curved into a triangle, what I meant is curve it to the other side. 11:57, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a bit? And possibly blur it a bit more along the main flank. And define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 01:40, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Milkweed (Ro) - For Approval
I am so unbelievably tired from the fifty essays I've had to write, but I'm still pretty happy with how this turned out. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:29, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

How in heaven did you even do this 0.0 smooth out /her/ right hind paw and left forepaw shading? 10:17, April 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And thanks. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:20, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W) ~ For Approval
Okay.-- 00:44, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

So yeah, I see no shading whatsoever. Define shading everywhere please 00:52, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

The lineart looks faded too, actually.

As well as the earpink, define and brighten the earpink 00:54, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''My bad, i had the shading layer hidden still. Not too sure about the lineart- but im hoping i fixed it? It looked solid black on my monitor. 01:00, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

There's still barely any shading. Darken it alot 01:08, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:22, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Looks much better. Define the shading on the legs? And possibly the tail? Only when you're feeling less tired maybe XD 01:26, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 01:35, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

He's in WindClan so shouldn't he be short haired? 02:46, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Evalution
Yay! My first Warrior for the PCA! Tried to match him as best I could to the apprentice, and im super proud of him! 01:06, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Oh goodness. Define the earpink quite a lot. It shouldn't be blurred that much. Maybe smudge the white chest some more as well 01:09, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

I can see you changed the earpink, but you have to say reuploaded when you post a new change. But the earpink still needs to be triangular. Try using a binary pixel tool. Erase the ear pink all together, redraw it in a triangle, and blur it very slightly. 01:21, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton, make sure the white patch on his chest is shaded too. Maybe make the earpink a little less neon? <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(0,0,0);">R <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(14,14,25);">a <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(28,28,51);">v <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(42,42,76);">e <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(57,57,102);">n <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(71,71,127);">s <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(85,85,153);">t <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(99,99,178);">e <span style="font-family:'ARESSENCE';color:rgb(114,114,204);">p<span style="color:rgb(128,128,229);">⋆ 01:23, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re~Upped Better? 01:34, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Still a problem with the earpink. Look at some other images to get a feel for how you should draw the earpink triangle. As for the other parts of Slightfoot, some of the shading is leaking away from the legs and stuff. If you want to look closely and change it, then I'd advise you to do that. 01:38, April 16, 2015 (UTC)

Clover (AFD) (Ki) ~ For Approval
-in mysterious voice- Mustachio comfirmed 02:19, April 16, 2015 (UTC)