Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Spiderleg (A) ~ Denied
OAs were Shimmerpool, Ivyheart, and SnowedLightning. Tweaked to restrict brown to underbelly only. -- 19:26, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading 22:45, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 01:22, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see the brown very well.

I can see the brown just fine. Its just under the shading 21:50, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the brown a little. It shouldn't be hard enough to see that I have to stare at it for my eyes to adjust to the darker colours. 02:56, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 21:01, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Denied due to lack of work. 05:43, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can I take over? 17:13, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah just reserve it first. 05:01, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt.) (K) - Tweaked
OAs were Frostheart and myself. tweaked for sourceless shading and earpink 01:07 Tue Nov 10

I still can't see your light source.

There also needs to be some depth on the tail and leg shading. Even if the light source landed both of them completely in the dark, they would still have shading to show depth, rather than being one solid color.

Still working?

She is, yeah. She's gonna upload it tonight. 14:16, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. sorry for the wait. i messed with the shading a lil bit. 21:35 Sat Nov 14

switch the head shading around - it's contradicting with the light source

reuploaded 22:36 Tue Nov 17

The head lighting's still contradicting the rest. The light source for the head is directly above, while the light source for the body and tail are coming from the left.

Dappletail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA is Bramblesnow. Tweaked to add white patches. 23:52, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

the patches are smudged, not blurred

I gave them a smudge then a blur, but if you think it should be smudged more (possibly sharpened a bit), let me know and I'll do that. 05:13, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

use a 1 px hard edged brush and smudge the white. I didn't blur the patches on the StarClan

Reupload 04:43, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks blurred

Reupload Pure smudging, I didn't blur at all. 05:41, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Dust Muzzle (K) - Tweaked
Tweaked to give him long fur. OA is me, last one to tweak was Skt. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:20, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

not an actual tweak really, just his eye colour. can you define the tail shading a bit? 12:55, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 20:37, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (W) - Redone
OA was the amazing sandy, and it was also touched by Nightshine, Ivy, Bloo, Mounty, Ferk, Beebs, and me. Redone to match Hawkfrost. This looks kinda better I think. 03:59, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The pale chest looks too sharp and the front paws look a bit flat. Nice

Re-uploaded: Also added the scar. 22:08, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the paws

Also, the pale chest looks kinda orange

Same applies as below. Also, define the light on the paws a bit.

Bramblestar (L) - Redone
OA was Shelly, and it was touched by Cloudy and me. It looks like other people touched it too but I'm not sure if they redid it or tweaked ... Redone to match Hawkfrost's stripes. 03:59, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts look orange/red and they could use smudging. 08:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

I don't smudge, and that's the shading. 12:19, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Also added the scar. 22:08, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Normally I wouldn't mention this, but given that he's specifically meant to be a mackerel tabby, he really needs to have the head stripes of one too. Something a bit more like this. Also, those eyes are pretty distinctly orange. The hue needs to be closer to yellow for them to be amber. And since Bramble's said to have the same amber eyes as Tigerstar, shouldn't they also be pale?

I used the stripe from Hawkfrost's kit. Do you just want me to change it anyways? 00:13, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe... probably should ask for some second opinions on that, since it would imply that hawkfrost's kit and apprentice should be tweaked as well, and if they're not, Bramble and HAwk won't actually have identical patterns at that point.

Mothflight (mc) ~ Tweaked
OAs were Scarletwind and Paleclaw. Tweaked to be graying

Could you blur the shading a tad?

Re-uploaded

Whitestar (L) - Tweaked
Being without internet for a few days gave me some time to fancy up his shading a bit. He was tweaked because his shading was terribly flat, so I redid it and fluffed up his earpink a bit at the same time. Last OA was me, originally Honeyfur with a tweak by Teldy.

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ Redone
OA is me. Redone for multiple issues. Here is an unshaded image for the others working on Sparrowpelt. 07:34, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

But I nominated the images... that's kinda not fair to me- I already have the two other images done, and I made it clear that I wanted to set the pattern. I was going to post earlier, but I was running late for work... =\ Considering I was the OA of the previous pattern, I think I should get to design it.