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Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
Ima try this, trolololol Skt Like a baws  00:47, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt Like a baws  00:41, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Stunningly awesome <3 8DD Blur the leg shading and shoulder shading and blur the pale chest :3 00:59, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, lovely shield brother 8D -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  02:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blue the stripes a bit 8D 22:38, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't blur the stripes cause it made it look stupid, but i smudged them more. And the pale chest is blurred, even if it don't look it. >.> Skt Like a baws  00:55, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading's edges a bit.<3 11:26, 04, 05, 2012

If I blur it anymore it basically disappears. o3o Skt Like a baws  23:36, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3  03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.) 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. 12:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink and blur them higlights. x3  21:24, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste below the stomach. 21:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tear the ear. 03:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots more. 18:24, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... I'm gonna have a huge quitter moment but a) I hate this image, b) my blur tool won't blur the shading anymore, c) this'll take me much longer then the two week timespan d) I hate this image! So I'm withdrawing this. Anyone who wants this may have it. 23:55, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this. :3 02:12, 28, 04, 2012

Make the earpink more red. 00:11, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded -  Meh, this is a fail. And Sunnyfrost, if someone has volenteered to take over an image and they haven't uploaded yet, please don't comment. 02:07, 29, 04, 2012

Blur the mid-shading a bit, and get rid of the white specks on the tail and front paw. 04:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add the torn ear. 00:46 Mon Apr 30

Reuploaded -  -dies- Ew this image. Oh and I'll soon fix that black line from the tail to the haunch. x| 05:28, 30, 04, 2012

<3 Darken and blur the shading. 21:13, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :O How can you like it?! D'awww Thanks. I hate the shading on this. >:/ 07:16, 03, 05, 2012

How could you not like this? Blur the belly shading~ 09:55, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt a bit to match her other images. 20:41, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Changes probably aren't showing. :/ Thanks Dazzly and um... I think I blew the shading. o3o 11:25, 04, 05, 2012

Still a tad bit blotchy. Blur it, please.

Marshstar (D) ~ Redone
Okay I know this was origanally supposed to be a tweak, but in chat Cloudy said that if it was impossible to tweak it could be a redo, not sure if this is what she meant but this is how I did it and if you want me to just tweak it then I will. But the shading needed to be fixed, the scars needed to be redone, and the earpink didn't match. The OA was... Scarletwind I think. 19:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a bit. 20:32, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 00:13, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

And define it. ^^ 01:07, 29, 04, 2012

Define the shading. 13:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/shoulder shading a bit more. 09:57, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:11, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink.... 22:09, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights." 00:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. 20:38, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Insaneular (I think), and it needed to match. Comments? 20:09, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken out some stripes. 04:54, 30, 04, 2012

I think it's my browser, but define the earpink some more. 21:47, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded yesterday I forgot to say it yesterday. And the earpink matches the warrior and apprentice, so I won't change it. 01:09, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to thicken out a few stripes to match. 06:33, 01, 05, 2012

Blur the ear pink a tiny bit and there's a bit of waste under him. 23:22, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:54, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his left ear 22:49, May 3, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the shading on the body s tad. Skt Like a baws  23:34, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (W) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows. Redone to match the deputy and elder, I believe. Comments? This matches so bad ;.; Yes I know I forgot the tufted ears...I'll add them later. ene  21:11, 04 29, 2012

Nice ^^ Define the neck shading. 21:16 Sun Apr 29

Re-uploaded. Tufted ears. -dies- 22:44, 04 29, 2012

This still needs to match more. Lessen the black and make the tabby pattern match. :/ <span style="">04:46, 30, 04, 2012

Still working on this Mooneh? <span style="">11:15, 04, 05, 2012

Stumpytail (W) - Redone
I personally like this version better. OA was me, at least the latest one was, and I didnt like the stripes, and it just overall looked bad...Comments?<333 01:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes just a bit. Nice job Twee~ 09:48, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit smaller. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Purty.~ 15:11, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving a bit of a warning, right now...I'm grounded until Wednesday Saturday, so I'll have it up then...just warning... {steps away} 23:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) ~ Tweaked
He needed a fluffy tail :3 Latest OA was Iceheart22. Changes probably aren't showing. I feel it needs to be floofier... 23:56, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it needs to be more floofier and possibly a tad spikier. <span style="">10:30, 02, 05, 2012

Also, make the lineart a bit thicker, if you can keep the floof<3 11:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh my word...I killed his tail ;.;  20:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

some of the floofy parts looks blockisk, make it...less blockish? i don't know how to phrase that owo -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  01:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Those are more likely the spiky parts x3. I'll fix that though. 10:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Silverstream (Ki) ~ Redone
Kit spree~! 8D I did her queen, so I had all the colours... just like Runningwind. So don't ask me to change the colour of the stripes, base, or eyes. Love you guys. <3 OA was Twi. Reason is to make her like her warrior.~ Comments, questions, concerns? 07:39, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and center the earpink. 19:47, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Round out the ear pink as well, and define the tail shading. Also, can you thickening out some of the stripes to match her other images? o3o 20:26, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:03, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Longtail (E) - Redone
Misty's reservation expired. Copied the stripes from the old image exactly. Shading was blotchy. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire, and Sandstar. Colors are from the apprentice .xcf. Comments? 19:20, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

owo Define the shading a bit 20:50, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Blur the scar on the eye a bit. 20:37, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Redone
Not completely sure who the OA on this one was.... Wildfire I think. But it needed to match the apprentice, so here we go. Comments? 19:22, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Purdy, blur the earpink. 22:30, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, and she needed sliced ears. I know, this would make her ears kinda...spaghetti-like, but this is how I imagined it in my mind how Hawkfrost would have ripped them. I added scars to her hears but they're kinda hard to see. 19:41, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think that the ear that is closest to us would have just been sliced off if it actually looked like that... Can you tone it down a tad? 19:46, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Painful ears look painful o.o Can you erase some of the lineart heading into the slices so it isn't just a drop off from thick to thin lineart? 20:30, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

While we have Ivypool out, she also needs a silver tail, white face, and white paws. 23:57, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

She has all those things though..... maybe get rid of the white tail tip, but otherwise I think it fits description well enough... 01:31, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think the pattern is fine; as (if memory serves) it never stated how much white paws she had, or how much white on her face. :/ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  12:05, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I agree. The pattern is fine the way it is. It was never revealed exactly how much silver/white she had.

Daisy (Alt. Q) ~ Redone
Shading needed to be redone. OA was Nightshine.

Lower the opacity on the shading and make the ear pink more pink-ish 20:45, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

blur the shading on her tail and belly -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:48, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

That belly's really... bright. o.o Blur it a little so it isn't so focused on one area. 04:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Owlstar (D) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to have larger eyes, and that's all I'm fixing. Comments? 23:28, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Just changed the color. OA was Mistystar. Comments? 22:50 Fri May 4

Yellowfang (Ki) ~ Tweaked
It's. So. Creepy. BAHAHAHAAHHA!! *mad scientist laugh* 23:05 Fri May 4

Scourge (Ki) ~ Redone
OA is Mosswhisker and Steathfire, with a tweak by Leafstorm.. I think. I dunno. I can't tell. Needed to be redone for multiple reasons. Yay, demon kit with a purple collar. <3

blur the earpink a tad  Eki  A wonderful king ❤  01:29, May 5, 2012 (UTC)