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Fringepaw (Lo) - For Approval
I don't... know how I feel about this. All colors are from the other image I did. Her description got swapped, so this is the main one now.

Can you define the shading on the white? Primarily the face, haunch and shoulder. —

It's a bit hard to tell with the shading you got here, but if not, there should be some white on the chest. I also think the front paw furthest from us should be predominantly white, and there should be white above the paw on the front limb closest to us. And, idk, try fiddling around with more white patches and splatters? Maybe that'll make it match better. 03:59, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Echo, where you're asking me to define the shading on the white (the haunch and shoulder specifically), there isn't going to be any due to the source I'm using (I use this one on almost all of my loner images), but I can try on the face. I'll reupload in a little bit. The fact I forgot how I made the apprentice image isn't helping any. ​​​​​​

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Slightly less crappy. ​​​​​​

That eye makes her look surprised, lol. I still can't see the facial shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:30, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Because most of the shading for this image in particular is on the top of the head, which is where the pattern is. I can't really just swap the head shading without ruining the source (and thus getting told to change it again). ​​​​​

It looks better now to me, at least on my phone, whereas on my PC the white seemed super stark to the rest of the body. I might have been nitpicky there, sorry! It looks good now. —

On the apprentice image, the white on the tail tip seems to be a little bit more extended, if that's the right word. 17:45, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean? They're about the same length...? I have a layer with the colors before I smudge and add white flecks, and they're about the same on both images. Unless I'm totally missing what you're saying here...? ​​​​

On the apprentice image, the white seems to reach to almost the midpoint of the tail. Not quite, but close. 18:19, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, no, it doesn't. This is what the colors look like before I smudge and add flecks. It just happens to be that there are a bit more flecks/whiter areas on that image than this one. I'll see what I can do after I get back. ​​​

Re-uploaded. Does this look better? ​​​

Looking great Jayce! The shading could be smoothed out on the legs and there should be a teensy bit of shading on the earpink.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:37, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

What legs? There are countless other images that have even rougher shading, and also ones that lack shading on the earpink. I'm sorry, but I honestly think it's fine. ​​

Yes the tail looks a lot better! It just needed a little more white. 22:39, December 5, 2018 (UTC)

Fringepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors from 'paw 02:57, December 6, 2018 (UTC)

The white on the chest is more gray than white.. lower the opacity of the shading a few ticks.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:18, December 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 04:58, December 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reups gah 05:01, December 6, 2018 (UTC)

Rabbittail (T) ~ For Approval
I'm iffy on this... I'll probably mess with the shading and texture later but I wanna see other people's opinions. —

Reuploaded I think I like this better. I swear I do different shading for every image jshjsfh —

Could you crop the image off the top? 00:58, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded —

Can you smoothen the shading and lighten it a tad. Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  03:46, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Hickorynose (T) ~ For Approval
God this was a mistake. My tablet pens broken, i'm waiting on the new one, but I decided it was a good idea to try with a mouse. Oh well, I'll just do what I can for now. :P Hoopefully this will turn out better than my last few tries here. Also just wanted to get it up and worry about it a little less. So here he is. SquidwardPlays 00:00, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

This is great for being done with mouse! Can you smooth out the belly shading a bit more? It looks blotchy. —

Eye depth could be defined a little bit.Heyoitpotater (talk) 00:11, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reup I BELIEVE I got it? If it needs more, I'll go ahead and do that though. Also, I won't do anything about the eyes unless someone agrees, myself. SquidwardPlays 00:12, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

There's still like two blotches on the stomach. Since the stomach is smooth, it should flow together with the light source. Also, the eyes do need depth. —

Reup Ah, I see what you mean. I recall having put them there as highlights considering theyre on the layer i put the highlights on, and i'll remove them if requested but for now i'm leaving it, and just tried to smooth those. I edited the eye a bit, though i'm not sure if I got that good enough. IF I didn't i'll try to fix the eye some more. SquidwardPlays 00:22, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

The eyes are pale yellow on the warrior pixel, maybe colorpick off that if you're not satisfied with the eye.Heyoitpotater (talk) 00:46, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I did colorpick when making this, actually. I color picked the darkest color and my original upload had the paler color colorpicked too, but in my attempt to fix it i changed up the paler color a bit. SquidwardPlays 00:54, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

When the eye needs depth, you can essentially treat it as shading. Make the eye have a darker rim or something. —

Reup Is this better? SquidwardPlays 01:00, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Yes. There's waste outside the tail, back, and the left front leg.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:09, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I should have gotten it. SquidwardPlays 02:21, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

You got the back waste but most of the waste is still there. Also just noticed that there's more waste near the hind leg.Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:30, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reups SquidwardPlays 03:33, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt W) - For Approval
I actually enjoyed this one. 02:17 Fri Dec 7

Can you define leg shading please. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:23, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

The yellow highlight on her shoulder is really kind of off-putting. Could you reduce it some? 02:28, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

That's actually a marking from the original image. It was color picked, but I'll see what I can do. 02:32 Fri Dec 7

This is utterly stunning. While I like the yellow highlight, you should desaturate it a bit, as Hawkey said it's really off putting. —

I think it's fine? Considering Sun said it was color picked from the image. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:35, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Nah going to agree with Hawk and Echo. That does look off to me. There are some unfilled pixels on the haunch. Also Sunjaw Fox said you can have Pebbleshine back, she doesn't have time to work on her anymore.Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:37, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Off-putting or not, they are shown on the image Sun is matching, so to remove them wouldn't make any sense. ​​

I never said to remove them. Only to reduce/desaturate them. 03:43, December 7, 2018 (UTC)