Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

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Yellowfang (Alt. R) - For Approval
This was fun ^_^ Comments? 05:52, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Darken the shading, define the scars, and maybe add some more back to her left ear. Scarlet wind Medicine Cat of SolarClan 05:56, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I forgot the nose color. *head desk* 06:36, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's showing the changes. 06:48, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I got it. 06:55, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Define the scars some more. Could you add the reference on her page? --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:13, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is excellent, Nighty! Make the scars more prominent.  Mistfire 1000 Edits!  17:36, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Defined the scars. Wildheart: The reference is on her page already. 20:32, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add another** reference to her page. It says she is mentioned several times as gray, and she has a warrior charart as well as a rogue... so... (Wildheart who is too lazy to log in)

Done. 23:22, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be grey not pink. 06:02, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's still only one reference... --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:09, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Someone removed it saying, "We only need one citiation." So I don't know if I should re-add it. 22:06, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I think you should re add it -- Night  shine  23:04, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done, and I'm not sure if the nose should be gray or pink. For example, Dovepaw, Hollykit and Willowpelt have pink noses. 00:35, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the fronts of the legs.  Mistfire 1000 Edits!  16:23, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be gray since most gray cats have gray noses-- Night  shine  18:39, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 22:49, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - But it's not showing the changes yet, so comment when you see a gray nose :P 04:17, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks gray to me. Maybe it takes a moment or two for the changes to show up. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 17:14, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why is some of the shading darker than the rest? 98.22.152.78 23:47, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Some changes are deeper or need more shading. Make the earpink less smudgy, otherwise, it looks pretty good. 01:17, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shoulder highlight. Great job Nighty!  Mistfire Spring rainfalls  17:43, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:22, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Rain that Rattles on Stones (Alt. E)~ For Approval
Comments? 01:53, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! But make the pink ear all the same color and I belive there is a line of somesort in the middle of the tail. Feathermoon 01:55, March 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Blur the shading on the forehead and near the base of the tail, and maybe add some white around his muzzle to show his age? Scarlet wind Medicine Cat of SolarClan 01:58, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is soooooo good! Blur the ear pink a little more and re-blur the shading near his haunches, tail, and face.Cardinalfire1234 02:05, March 12, 2011 (UTC)Cardinalfire1234]

Re-uploaded- I tried giving him a lighter muzzle, but it only made it look like the face highlight was to bright. 02:24, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur back and neck shading.  Mistfire 1000 Edits!  16:35, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Rain.elder.alt.png --   Moon  leaf  16:58, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Everythings as blurred as it's going to get. 20:22, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular-- Night  shine  23:12, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- 00:12, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Darkhallows... Mew? 21:41, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt CBA... but you still didn't rename it Rain.elder.alt.png. --  Moon  leaf  22:45, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

If you look at the image page, you can see that it been requested to be renamed already. So can my CBA continue because there wasn't acctually an issue? 00:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you just upload another image with the file name Rain.elder.alt.png? Night shine  00:45, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE-uploaded- 03:19, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. Is that the right earpink color? just wondering. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  22:46, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me; repeating 24 hours-- Night  shine  23:00, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is unevenly blurred. At the top, it's more blurred. 05:14, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur highlights or darken them.  <font color="#A1C2E3">Mistfire <font color="#A1C2E3">Spring rainfalls  17:38, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink and highlights look fine to me. Repeating 24 hours Night  shine  18:58, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

The 24 hours was finished when they commented, can't this just be archived? 21:02, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Since they did comment, the 24 hours had to be restarted. I'll approve this once it's been 24 hours Night  shine  04:34, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ice (Lo) - For Approval
Ice's loner version. Comments? - Ginger  tail <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script>The Luck Of The Irish... <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script> 18:33, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, so it doesn't blend in with the pelt as much. This looks great! :) 19:02, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Aw thanks :) - Ginger  tail <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script>The Luck Of The Irish... <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script> 19:15, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and maybe give him a blood clan collar. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 20:00, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also give him amber eyes, like on his rogue image? 04:00, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darkened the shading, attempted to blurr the shading adn highlights, and lightened the ear pink. Added collar, though it isn' t ver good :| - Ginger  tail <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script>The Luck Of The Irish... <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script> 14:40, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Move the highlights up on to the middle of his shoulder and hip, blur the shading a bit more, and make the teeth on the collar more noticeable, it looks like the collar is more jeweled rather than has teeth coming out of it. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 15:45, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

The collar looks a bit flat. Make the shading more noticeable there. :] 17:37, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you rename it Ice.loner.png? And there is some blurred lineart on the right-back leg, near the tail. 20:52, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

In his Rogue charart he has a blue collar, not a red one, so you should probably change the color. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:06, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *sigh* not much better, but I added more highlights, blurred, changed collar color adn fixed the teeth, ext. - Ginger  tail <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script>The Luck Of The Irish... <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script> 19:48, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:41, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Dry making the ear a little more reddish-pinkish instead of pinkish Feathermoon 01:03, March 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Brighten the highlights. 01:00, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the earpink. 98.22.152.78 23:39, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Since he's in bloodclan, i belive he needs dog teeth reinforced in his claws. Right? 00:10, March 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Good point, Feathermoon. And blur the shading a little more.  <font color="#A1C2E3">Mistfire <font color="#A1C2E3">Spring rainfalls  17:35, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. W) - For Approval
Before any of you say something about blurring the shading/highlights, I just want to say I've blurred it as much as Pixlr has allowed me. Someone want to help? 01:07, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'll blur it in GIMP. 01:31, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! 01:56, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Amke the ear pink more triangular, blur it, and make it more red. 02:26, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred the shading for you, but I don't think I did it enough though :P 06:02, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear-pink more noticeable. 17:37, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the highlights have to be blurred more as well. Also there is some blurred lineart on his front left paw and back left leg. The eye color looks like a brown, maybe make it more amber. 20:05, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the shading, re-did the earpink, and triple-checked for blurred lineart. I found nothing. Besides, I took the eye color from the regular Birchfall. I also blurred the shading as much as it'll blur. Will someone heelp me a teensy-bit more? 03:40, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the earpink? 12:15, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink as well to make it more noticable. (Phew, glad I'm not the only one who uses Pixlr on everything!) 21:16, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading ot the chest and maybe add highlights (If they are already there brighten them :3). 01:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't add too much shading to his chest, 'cause the light is kinda coming, like, directly in front of there. I also fixed the earpink, and blurred everything to the max. Can someone help me some more? 03:04, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'll blur it some more if you want :) 03:42, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please! 03:45, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- It helped some. Could use a bit more... 04:04, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-re-uploaded- Sorry did the wrong one the first time X /. 04:15, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

lol....anyway, thanks Iceheart! 00:17, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink either brighter or darker, whichever makes it look more noticeable. 01:02, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened it. :S 03:32, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and scoot it farther up the ear a little. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  14:03, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:53, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  17:27, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

darken the ear-pink. Maybe make it a bit of a dark red/maroonish color? <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 19:19, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Snake (Lo) - For Approval
I'm not sure if he would get a collar or not, What do you think? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 03:33, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Just lighten the Highlights and darken the shading. Feathermoon 03:44, March 13, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Yes I believe he should get a collar. Make the ear pink more reddish-- Night  shine  06:18, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, they need collars. Use Bone and Scourge's images to help, I found them sueful when dooing Ice's collar. - Ginger  tail <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script>The Luck Of The Irish... <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script> 14:43, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Collar fail. XP

Maybe put some shading under the collar. 20:46, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I just realized ICE was the one who had a blue collar. Snake has a red one. I added some shading under the collar like Riverpelt said.

Thicken the shading or add highlights. The midsection just looks... emptyish. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:38, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the end of the tail. Not a highlight, but just not in shadow. 01:24, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I won't be able to work on this for a fewdays. My computer's been acting wacky and my brother can't fix it for a few more days. I'll work on this as soon as it's fixed though. Sorry. D: ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:21, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading and highlights.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  17:07, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (alt. L) - For Approval
He was described as tawny in Bluestar's Prophecy. Comments/criticsm?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  18:03, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and darken the shading. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 18:30, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the tail, fix that please. :3 19:11, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the earpink....it looks kinda weird. 11:07, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

It should be a bit more orange-y. There's some blurred lineart on the front right leg also. 192.203.211.254 17:33, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the earpink less purply and more red-pink. 22:52, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Also, do you have a ref for that? There's nothing on his page. 03:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

I tried posting this thre times but my computer got screwed up -.- theres a tad of white on the tail you forgot to color in, and the highlights could be blurred a tad. - Ginger  tail <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script>The Luck Of The Irish... <font color="#28AE7B" face="Segoe Script> 20:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink should fill the whole ear. 01:28, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't really have to. Looks fine! --  Moon  leaf  02:24, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it does have to, thats how the line art was designed. 03:41, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to know what tawny should look like, look at my alternate for Tawnypelt on this page. I think there is some blurred lineart on the haunch. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  14:18, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think this color for tawny looks fine. 20:09, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Same here. On the tail, there's a white pixel in the lineart. Can you fill that in? Echostar229 01:27, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

There's also blurred lineart on the tail. It may have some one of the forelegs but I'm not too positive on that. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  14:07, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. '' <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  17:33, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make this more gingery (it's too brown right now) and lighten the ear pink. Also make the ear pink fill the whole ear. -- Night  shine  18:49, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink a little and blur the tail shading. 01:37, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  17:12, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

The white pixel on the tail still isn't filled in, so fill that in please. Also, the earpink isn't filling the whole ear still and brighten the highlights more. 17:18, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there a tiny gray smudge between the tail and the foot? Also, blur the shading. 04:40, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nightflower is right. It needs to be removed. Unless this has already been discussed, brighten the highlights. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">MINTSTARR  That peaceful Hawaiian breeze....  20:47, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (K)- For Approval
Here she is..... Comments? Echostar229 03:37, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink darker/more dull. 03:39, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see any silver parts, maybe add some streaks or patches? <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 03:57, March 16, 2011 (UTC) scratch that. Darken the whole thing a tad. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 04:48, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Echostar229 01:31, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  14:19, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Echostar, you can only have one image up for approval. As of now, you have two; Oakheart and Willowbreeze. I don't know what happens next, another user probably know though. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  14:24, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well she stopped working on it I think. Echostar, I suggest you put withdrawn by user on Oakheart's image, or we can see if it'll just be declined because the image may not be needed. Oh and brighten the highlights a tad on the image. :3 20:12, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I did put the words 'Withdrawn' on it, and the image has been removed from the page. I had stopped working on him about a week ago, in case no one noticed my lack of updating him, me starting a new image, and the big words in the title. Oh, and, reuploaded. Echostar229 01:25, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well you never actually specified that you had withdrawn it. So please do so in the future. Add tail shading, add shading to the fore arms, add shading under the chin Night  shine  01:29, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Weird, 'cause it said 'Withdrawn' next to it on my computer before it was archived. The light's coming from the left [her right] so I don't think she would have chin shading. There's also shading on her arms and tail. Echostar229 01:38, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

I was the one that put withdrawn there. There should be shading under the chin since all other kit chararts have that and it makes it look less flat. Darken the shading on the forearms/tail Night  shine  23:00, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Whatever. Reuploaded. Echostar229 00:33, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Darkhallows... Mew? 04:57, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. 01:35, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think the shading's gotten worse...... :S Echostar229 03:53, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  16:52, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading go all the way across under the chin/ the neck. 22:54, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (A) ~ For Approval
I know that it doesn't really match Echostar's but I'm still playing around with different patterns, until I see Night Shine's. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 04:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC) Scratch that, I'm gonna redo it, I saw her description as "Silver and gray she-cat". <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 04:03, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Redone. Comments for improvement? <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 04:22, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink less purple. 04:24, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing, it's too light right now-- Night  shine  04:30, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 04:47, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading on far forearm, add shading under chin and to space in front of forearm on chest. Add/darken the ear pink Night  shine  04:53, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 20:00, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:13, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 21:18, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit Night  shine  00:44, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 02:13, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, it looks kind of flat-- Night  shine  22:59, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the fronts of the legs  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  21:15, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 21:49, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, the shading is just a bit lumpy/rough/uneven. Blur it all a bit. 01:34, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 02:07, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten/blur neck shading  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  16:52, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 22:26, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading. 22:51, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

And the haunch shading. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">MINTSTARR  That peaceful Hawaiian breeze....  20:45, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (W) - For Approval
Comments? Night shine  04:30, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work. Darken the ear-pink and make it a bit paler (it looks kinda coralish), blur the highlights on the shoulder and flank, and maybe lighten it all a bit? <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 04:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, should I darken the ear pink or make it more pale? Night shine  04:35, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was kinda vague. darken it a tad. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 04:36, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened it a bit, darkened ear pink Night  shine  04:53, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck and shoulder areas. Feathermoon 22:57, March 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Hm, the shading there looks fine on my computer. Night shine  00:43, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading does look like it needs to blurred around the neck and shoulder. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  14:08, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I darkened the shading because it looked to light for me, and I also blurred it-- Night  shine  22:58, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, it seems that there's a dark spot on her one paw. Back paw on her haunch. It seems like it shouldn't be there. Should it? Other than that, she looks really good, Nightshine. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 01:09, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lightn the shading and blur the highlights.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  17:35, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near the middle of her stomach a bit more. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 21:52, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, however, the shading on the tail looks off. The light source is coming from the front, but there is shading on the bottom of the tail and highlights on the top. You should have shading around the edges with highlights in the middle. Also, blur the shading a bit. Other than that, it looks amazing. 01:33, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back legs is uneven. The very right of the back leg is lighter, it's normal colour, however, shouldn't it be darker? Unless I'm seeing it wrong. :3 Lovely charart. 01:37, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I redid it. Comments? Night shine  18:56, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:50, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred the neck shading, but I think it looks worse now Night  shine  23:01, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

It looks darker than it should be. How about lightening it up just a tad, then blurring a little more? Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 17:43, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you try and make the ear pink a bit bigger? :3  21:39, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Okay, Tigerheart re-posted! Comments? --  Moon  leaf  17:36, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

This looks better. I can't think of anything that would need touching up. I don't think it could use more blurring, either. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 17:42, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit. 18:34, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

How? 21:18, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think she means make them more noticeable. 21:38, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 21:54, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur alt. - Declined
A lot of times he is described as ginger. Comments? ✳  YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ✳ 16:11, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... He is ginger. Sorry but this will be declined. 18:46, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

And I moved this to the right section. 18:49, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur(alt.A) ~ For Approval


Brackenfur was described as a brown tabby apprentice in Forest of Secrets. Comments? 21:52, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 21:53, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

=Discussion Area= Use this area to post join requests, questions, and general discussion.

Should there be...
I was browsing around the wikia when I noticed that there are quite a few StarClan cats. Should there be StarClan cat blanks? Like, with starry fur and paws and whatnot? It would only be used if the cat had appeared in StarClan in the books, not if they are just an assumed StarClan members. I'm not completly sure about it. 19:06, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think we agreed not to do those because a cat stays a warrior/apprentice/leader even after it dies. Darkhallows... Mew? 19:13, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I agree with Darkhallows. It would be a very big change for such a minor issue. It would mean a great deal of change that us unessasary. 22:00, March 19, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I actually had the same idea (xD), but I agree with both up there ^^^ --   Moon  leaf  17:37, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join PCA?
Um....

I applied before but I never got an answer. D:

So, can I join PCA? Dustleaf 22:12, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

You're already a member. I must have archived the section before you got to read it, sorry Night  shine  22:15, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reserve
Could I reserve Dovepaws warrior charart? ✳  YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ✳ 21:09, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Not until you've finished your current one; and not until its confirmed that she becomes a warrior. 207.62.246.71 21:25, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hi. May I join? :) .Skystar. 22:42, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in now Skystar. Welcome to the project! Please read the basic guidelines before reserving a charart. Night shine  03:12, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

My current one is finished, but can I have it reserved? ✳  YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ✳ 10:57, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

No. The book hasn't been released yet. 21:05, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

New Forums
I have moved three of the current discussions taking place here to the Project forum. Please go there to continue discussions, and note that long-term discussion should take place in a forum where they will not clutter up the talk page. -- 23:37, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Brook Reserve
Can I reserve Brook's queen image. We all know she is gonna be a queen sooo.Honeybreeze 00:48, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

No. The book is not released, so therefore you may not reserve the image. 00:49, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can I reserve it when it comes out?Honeybreeze 00:50, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Charart reservations are strictly on a first-come, first-serve basis. 00:51, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think itshow her as a queen; the sneak peek from Spirits in the Stars in Seekers (Erin's other series) reveals she has two sons, Lark and Pine. Egyptian Jewel  00:58, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reserve
May I reserve Ivypaws Warrior charart? Crystalstar999 03:07, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Once the book comes out when she is a warrior, then you can reserve it if no one else has. But for now you can't reserve it. Night shine  03:11, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-join?
Hey, I'm active again and was wondering if I could re-join? 04:55, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you back in now Mistflower. Welcome back! Night shine  06:01, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Who..?
Who removed all the descusions without arciving them.. They were still active, and shouldn't have been taken off. Darkhallows... Mew? 07:36, March 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Bramble was cleaning up the page, and she moved the discussions to the PCA Forum. Cloud  skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 12:47, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, alright that makes sense. Eek, I feel stupid now. Darkhallows... Mew? 20:16, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

My Charart = Gone?
What happened? I had Tigerheart's alt. warrior up for approval, and now it's gone! Was it declined? I'm confused (I was away for a few days) --   Moon  leaf  17:28, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I look at the declined archives and found it there. Now I know why. --  Moon  leaf  17:33, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can I Join?
Can I join?

PLEASE??????????????

20:22, March 21, 2011 (UTC)