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Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky Molto bene 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out and blur the chest, paws, and tail tip feathering; it looked a bit choppy 23:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste, Trolly. ^^; Also, blur the ear pink. 03:05, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add the slightest tad more opacity to the shading. *thought Cloudy was Sky e3e* 08:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yea, blur the shading, too. Forgot to mention that up ^^^there. Dazzle did what now? =P  09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge that hard edged bit off to the right on the white on the tail? How did you mistake her for my awesomeness? xD Sky Molto bene 12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 09:00, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on it. It will be up later. 11:09, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded This would have been up earlier today, but I woke up and 3:30 AM and I haven't gone to sleep since >_>. (It's 4:42 PM now, so.. xD.) 20:42, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the white? 01:47, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I'll blur it a bit, since if I blur it too much it will look really bad, and if I don't blur it, people will say I need to. (Waiting for a few more comments before editing.) 10:46, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head a bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  00:27, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Not just the head shading...blur the rest of it too. 04:50, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the white by the whiskers a tad, just a little. 14:09, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E)- Tweaked
Tweak patched cause they were too neon. OA=Ashshadow 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink match the patches' colour? Or do the other way around... 03:06, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - sorry it look a while, Im using my parent's laptop and I'm getting confused with all the files 04:01, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

The patchy fur is awfully bright. Hurts mah eyes Dx Tone it down a bit? 08:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

No offence to you or the OA, but this image is just.... Eugh. Any chance of you redoing? 05:18, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I second that. Again, no offense, but you'd be better off redoing it :S 05:07, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to third that, Bloo. I know you'll make it look even better. 8D 04:49, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Bloo left, anyone can take over now. And since there's practically three votes for a redo right here, anyone can redo it. 15:56 Sat Mar 17

Redtail (D) - Tweaked
There are so many changes to this file, it's hard to keep track.. But the first OA was Sandy, with the most recent redo by Iceheart. He needed a floofy tail. 17:51, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the tail pweeze. Maybe make it a bit pineconey, kinda like Squirrelflight's? 23:55, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Or, if you want him to have a bottlebrush tail, go nuts with it. Yeah, that's a ferret's tail, but it's the first pic I found of a nutso bottlebrush tail. 00:14, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more 'floof' to the bottom where it's straight, kinda like the warrior? 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dat floof >:C 20:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the tail lineart some more. 21:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

See my comment on the warrior. I can't; there simply aren't enough pixels to fit all that 21:43, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's two black pixels inside the tail. 18:55, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, technically there's three black pixels, but same thing xD Can you possibly just add one more layer of pixels to the fluffy tail? (sorry if you can't, but it just looks so thin...) 14:05, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (W) - Tweaked
Fluffff <3 OA was Insane with a redo by Iceheart. 18:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the bushy-ness more even at the top of the tail, it kind of dips. 21:59, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

And make the lines on the tail thicker. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't make the lines on the tail thicker or it won't look the same. Trust me. The same applies for the deputy. 20:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it a bit.... crazier to match the deputy? XD And there's like two random black pixels inside the tail near the base. 07:24, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
The patches were over-blurred in some places and shading was some-what blotchy. OA's were Sandstar, Bloo, and Leaf-storm. 19:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, you're fine. 8D Just lighten and blur the earpink. 21:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  22:23, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:24, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I dont think the changes are showing... 22:33, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest a tad. :3 23:00, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Move the highlight of the eye to match the light source and maybe make the tail tip a bit wavier? It looks kinda funny since it's just straight, but that's just my opinion. 23:59, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable/define it. 01:14, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the shading/highlight/lighter spot on his shoulder --  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the gray into the white? He's long-furred, so I think it oughta look furry. :3 03:11, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since smudging is optional and other images would have to be tweaked it if was smudged, I think it should stay as is. Could you whiten the white a little though? 06:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink, and make it more triangular. it's awfully hard to see.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:12, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 23:25, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? And, make the white more white and less gray :3 09:25, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can fix the ear pink, but the white is as white as I can possibly get it. :/ I'll be reuploading sometime tomorrow or Saturday. 23:14, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Still gotta blur that shading a bit. =P 04:48, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3  15:43, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you tone down the eyes? They look kinda neon. 17:19, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shredtail (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine with a tweak by me. The fur on the tail look all choppy, the scars looked paint brushed on, and he was a modified triangle tabby. I hate to have to redo one of Night Shine's fantastic chararts, but for the sake of realism... Comments? 23:37, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

P.S. I forgot to add ragged fur, I'll do that when I reupload. 23:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't the tail tip be rounded a bit? To quote myself on chat: "Holy sh**." 23:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Haha luff ya, Cloudy! :) 23:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the naked part of his tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 02:40, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The scars on his tail look off. They go onto parts of his tail that would be fur, not skin. To fix this, either add bare patches where you know the tail would be, or remove the scars in their entirety. Also, can you take the smudge tool and make the scars taper in a more natural fashion? 02:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

You don't have to, but I think that you could add a furry tone to the stripes :3 *steals* 08:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is awesome. =3 *steals* 18:45, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone
Redone to match his warrior image. Why yes, that is a paw on the collar. Why? Because I take it to the next level. Comments? 02:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? The paw is a neat little touch. <3 Sky Molto bene 02:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The white on the tail looks pure white. Even if it is not, could you add a little shading to the furry part on the bottom? 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

As much as I love the adorable little white paw on it, his collar needs to be removed. He was shown without one, and as far as I know, was never mentioned with one. I don't see anything else wrong though, lovely job. <3 05:42, March 12, 2012 (UTC)


 * I'd really rather keep the collar. It's possible he did what Cody did: slipped out of his collar whenever he went out. 05:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

And put it on again everytime he went back? I seriously doubt that. I'm sorry, but since we have proof he wasn't wearing a collar, I really do think it should be removed. Did it ever mention him with a collar anywhere? If not, it should be removed. Not all kittypets have to wear collars.... 06:19, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

He was never specifically mentioned without one at his house, either. And yes, cats can put collars back on. I've seen it myself. I'm keeping it. 06:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

We have no proof of that though. However, we have proof of him not wearing a collar every single time we've seen him. Remove it please. 06:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he was shown without it in both the graphic novel in the back of SD, as well as the SkyClan set...and in SD, he was shown coming right from his twoleg nest. Wouldn't that count for something? 06:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Personally I think all kittypets should have collars even if they weren't shown with one on. It shows rank, not all bloodclan cats had teeth and claws yet they are shown with them. So I think the collar should be left on. 16:12, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also lighten the shading. 17:15, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since when did all BloodClan cats get collars and claws added to them? They never did, only if they're shown. There's very few BloodClan cats who have images with collars. And why should kittypets (not saying specifically Billystorm, just responding to wildfire) have collars if they are shown without them? That makes no sense. The blank shows the rank just fine without a collar. 17:32, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

(sigh) Fine. Removed it. Re-uploaded. 18:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

In the guidelines it says, "All BloodClan cats are depicted with modified rogue blanks, with toothed collars and dog's teeth sheathed on their claws." So they all should have collars. Also he should have one on warrior image to show he's a daylight warrior. 18:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, this isn't the place to be having this conversation. Take it elsewhere. 18:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome Billystorm is awesome~<3 Blur the highlight/nonshaded part on his shoulder, and make that---> side of his neck curve inward a bit like a this> ( 19:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be my moniter, but he looks too brown, make him more ginger-y.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:14, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

It's the shading, Sunny. He's ginger. 23:15, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:49, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

HE's actually more ginger than his warrior. XD It's fine. But can you blur the earpink and define it (in color)? 03:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

If I blue it more it mostly becomes a weird looking blob, and the color matches the warrior. However, if anyone else wants me to, I'll change the color. 06:04, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Just blur it the tiniest bit? On a very low setting. It looks very hard edged right now.... I know what a pain getting it not to overblur is though. x.x 09:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (KP) ~ Redone
Tonka!! <33 My kitty I love her so much 8DD OA was Nightfall with a twaek by Twi. Comments? 23:19 Mon Mar 12

Gaaah I forgot the stripes are supposed to be thin D8 *fixing that* 23:25 Mon Mar 12

Make her paws more white and less creamish. 23:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:55 Mon Mar 12

I don't have any of the Ravenpaw's Path manga so I can't check, but was she shown with a collar? 05:19, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know. Maybe she got a collar from her owners. 05:31 Tue Mar 13

I think the collar can stay. Make the paws a bit more white. Awesome as always, Mounty <3 08:26, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8DD 20:52 Tue Mar 13

Kittypet gets a collar. I just checked. You're all good, Mountain. 00:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Her left (our right) ear looks kinda... empty. Can you add a stripe or two to it? And the highlight on her left (our right) eye is hard to see. 23:29, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:12 Sat Mar 17

Yellowfang (E) - Tweaked
I just tweaked the muzzle....OA was Thistle (who had help from 'teldy.) Comments? 01:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The line should end at the edge of her mouth and should not extend below it. 01:49, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Like this? 20:58, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Alt Lo) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike, he needed an underbite. I'm not sure if I should make his teeth longer or not or to define his jaw line some. That's what you critiquers are for :P Because something just doesn't look right. 02:43, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the chin lineart. 05:18, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also, it's your choice, but maybe make the white part of the eye smaller. 15:34, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice, Wild. 06:20, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the ears. 10:47, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe sharpen the teeth? 12:42, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

@Cloudy I know read the 2nd-4th words. Make the chin more rounded 15:59, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

You have the teeth coming out of his nose... move them down to where the mouth would be, please. 16:17, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Actually they were more down, Shelly. I fiddled around with the nose so you could see it better, though. 22:59, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pinefur (W) - Redone
Totally forgot to check if the nomination was approved.... XD I had so much fun with this it's ridiculous. <3 Anyways, stripes were unrealistic, and in my opinion shading was eh, but others might have disagreed. I'm so glad I can finally redo this. XD OA was Sandstar with a redo by me. Comments? 15:56, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading? Wonderful, Paleh! 21:13, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. *Steals kitty and pats* Sky Exterminate! 00:13, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, too. Me luffs this. 04:47, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Seville (KP) ~ Redone
Woo, the paw print is back~ Comments? 03:59, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

lol. Define the ear pink, please. 04:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Return of the paw print~ Blur the stripes a little bit.

I love the paw print. Blur the ear pink a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  10:50, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Because Mounty. 01:24, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Heavystep (A) ~ Redone
Redone to match his new warrior and elder. I think this is the last one. OTL Breeze  whisker  18:00, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the pale underparts if you can, and define the earpink. Looks great, Breezy! *steals* 19:37, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (TB) ~ Tweaked
He needed patches, OA is Sandstar12 with redo by Iceheart22. I just tweaked the pelt and made the patches off of this, to be realistic, I'll change it if someone wants me to. 19:32, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and there's waste near the forehead. 19:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:45, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the highlights a bit? 21:09, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the patches. 21:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Um It doesn't have highlights... Which part of the patches? The part with the stripes or the outside part? I can't blur the stripes anymore or it'll look messed up. 23:51, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 23:58, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Fawnstep (MC) ~ Redone
Fail on tabby cx Well, she had to be redone because she had unrealistic stripes & the white was blotchy. OA was Hiddensun with tweaks by Rainwhisper and Bloo. 22:12, March 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * steals* This is purty. =3 Just define the eye and herb depth, and thin out the stripes at the tips. 22:19, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Sky Exterminate! 00:38, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on the chest a bit. <3 02:08, 17, 03, 2012

I think you should shrink the white on the chest, it looks too big... 02:15, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pfff Stoney this is my first try at a mackerel tabby... Dx Defined eye and herb depth, and kind of thinned out the stripes. I also defined the tail shading and blurred the chest just a tad. And Leafstrike, I think the chest is fine. 04:29, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I still think it's too big... :/. 19:21, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (A) - Redone
Not sure how I feel about this one..... Anyways, redone cause it didn't look like tortie patches. OA was Sandstar then the wonderful Leggy. Comments? 22:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

8DDD Lovely!~ Can you just smudge the pelt into the earpink? 22:39, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

I am jealous of you Paleh x3. Smudge that little white pixel on her tail. 23:49, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

The Wonderful Leggy? I like that title. 8D Anyway, can you darken or desaturate the nose, so it isn't so neon? 23:57, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Ish so purdy *u* Define the earpink. 19:31 Sat Mar 17

Hollyleaf (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was me, and the shading was bad. I couldn't find the .xcf, so I had to redo it. 22:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the paws. <3 23:39, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:41, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and center the earpink? 15:40, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The ear pink is centered, Misty. XD 15:44, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Derp me and my poor eyesight xD Blur the chest shading x3  21:11, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:36, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (L) ~ Redone
Ehehehehe. OA was Minnowclaw an was tweaked/redone by Mintstarr. Comments? 00:20 Sat Mar 17

Seriously, this is awesome! Smudge the earpink. 00:22, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Mounty...How do you expect me to match this awesome image? *o* Maybe add a patch or two to the forelegs or necks. 00:26, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

'kay, let's try this again, since my last comment killed the page. XD

Darken the shading just a teeny bit. This is epic. 00:29, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add some varied colors in the patches? Also, when I saw this, I did indeed spout some explicit language that I cannot repeat here. So... yeah. Good job. XD 00:46, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8DDD Thank you all so much <333 @Shelly XDDDDD 01:20 Sat Mar 17

Ohmy. *dies* I think the nose could be more pinkish. *still dead* 11:42, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think it's fine. It seems to match pretty well. 16:03, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Eh... Sorry, but Leopardstar doesn't have a pale chest :x 17:30, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, Fallow. It gives her some variety. Plus, don't most tabbies have some form of a pale chest? 17:31, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

The pale chest is artist's choice. 17:32 Sat Mar 17

Mmhm. Blur the tail shading a bit. Sky Exterminate! 20:47, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This is as blurred as it will go. 21:05 Sat Mar 17

Firekit (Ki) - Redone
The original artist was Silvereye, and the colour, stripes, and earpink were off. Comments? 03:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cute~ Could you make her a tad bit more orange? 03:21, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink as well, please. 03:35, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:02, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the tail shading? <3 06:50, March 17, 2012 (UTC)'

Blur the paw shading. Looks better than before :3. 10:41, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Adorable <3 Can you define the shading in all? 15:22, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:28, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwhisker - Tweaked
He needed his whiskers longer. OA was Dawnfeather with a redo by Paleclaw. (I think it was a redo. And I hope no one had dibs on this.) Sky Exterminate! 06:36, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste at the far ear lol XP 06:38 Sat Mar 17

Re-uploaded. How the frik did that get there? o.o Sky Exterminate! 06:44, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked


This is my first tweak, so just tell me if I'm doing something wrong.

So okayyy. I tweaked the shading and tried to make it more like her apprentice.

Comments? :3

15:35, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks almost like it is tinted brown... (sorry if its just my computer) Can you fix that? 15:46, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle you dork this is over the limit X3 16:01 Sat Mar 17

Yup, it is. xD Silly Thistle. Declined for now, you can repost when there's space. 18:52, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I archived something so you're good. 19:30 Sat Mar 17

The shading looks kind of green. When I did her apprentice, I tinted her shading slightly red, so that might help :)  23:16, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (D) ~ Redone
OA was Echomist, and reason for redo was because the shading and lighting was very blotchy. File changes might not be showing yet. Also, Cloudy sent me the apprentice's .xcf file, so I got the colors exactly from that, and I'm not changing them. Comments? 23:02, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it smaller. 23:07, March 17, 2012 (UTC)