Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Sagewhisker (MC) ~ Tweaked
OA of the most recent version is me. All I did was copy the whisker lineart from the previous file.

Can you define the shading a tad, it's kind of hard to see. 15:08, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think it's fine. If I try and define it, it's going to look...iffy. I already tried the last time. ._.

Sorry but I agree, it needs to be defined. 16:06, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Meh.

Jagged Lightning (SC) ~ Redone
OA is Goldenpaw, and it was shiny and overblurred. Eeeee, I love his name. Added to the fact I lurve my black and white kittehs even more than Scar loves ginger and white ones.<3

He's sexy! I know you don't use highlights, but maybe make his base pelt color a bit lighter; his back look like full shading. I like ginger and white kitties more than your bw kitties! 22:42, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'll use highlights if the situation calls for it. No, Scar. Keep on dreaming, though.

Personally, I think highlight'd be a bit more effective, but artist's choice. This is also just opinion, but maybe extend the white onto his cheek a bit more; it makes his head look a little boxy :P I luv ginger n' whites more than you <3 N :P   22:56, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shall we try this? And Scar, no. Just no.

Lighten the back haunch a bit. It looks black. 00:11, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you expand the "highlight" on the tail some more? 07:02, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Re-did the shading/highlights/whatever lol.

Russetfur (A) - Tweaked
Redid the stripes to match the other images. OA was me. 23:28, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, please. 8D

Stoneteller (Ancient) (TB) - Tweaked
Just lightened the shading. OA was me. Comments? 23:28, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a little more? c: 00:15, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:05, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the white parts. She looks pale gray.

Husker (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA was Nightwhisker98 and then was redone by Shellheart and then redone with the new blanks by Rowan. I darkened him and changed the light parts on the face and the earpink to match. Comments? 00:16, 18, 11, 2012

Do you think you can add a tuft for that grey, like it says in the description? 07:01, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

The one on his head? It's already there o.o 07:08, 18, 11, 2012

Well, with these blanks, the area in which you have to work with is kinda small... It's fine, I'd say. Can you define the shading and possibly darken it a tad?

Chasing Clouds (SC) - Redone
Redone for shading issues. I also felt that the grey was too dark in the other image for being pale. I'm not sure about that shading source or the color, and I can change it if I need to. I don't like this. .-.  01:21, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

Oooh I like~ I'd say darken the gray just a tad though so it doesn't look so much like shaded white. 12:13, November 18, 2012 (UTC)