Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 134

Willowshine (Alt. MCA 2) - Approved
So I realized they use the same picture in Cats of the Clans, and she is listed as an apprentice, so here's the same version as the one I did before. It should be pretty exact as I have the file and everything. 02:48, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

I thought there's already one for her apprentice version. They're both pale gray tabbies, the only difference is the eye color. Anyways, maybe darken the shading a little? 03:53, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't think so, the other pale's are for the writing, these are after pictures. 04:00, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. 07:51, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Patchkit (MV) - Approved
B) 00:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? He's so adorable :3 00:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. too bad he's dead lel 00:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded again and chnged a few things i didnt like 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved. 21:24, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitfur (E) - Approved
Bunfur confirmed. 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the tabby stripes lighter? They just seem too dark to me. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

i think they're fine unless others disagree - i think it's artist choice on stripe darkness? 10:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

stripes are fine, a shae was never specified. anyway lighten up the area where his tail meets his back just a little. 14:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 21:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading juuuust a tad. Not much, but kinda like what you did for Mousefang's kit.

re-up 18:38, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA for the ever-so-lovely Beebs?

Approved. 21:24, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (W) - Approved
- she might fall more into the mottled category than speckled... but I think she looks cool 01:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead and... Define the light on the legs? 02:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be cloudy and blind, I would think. 11:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, that would probably be an alt- Longtail had the same thing happen and since it happened later, it would probably be better to have an alternate image of it once this gets approved. Percy is also the same way.

yeah i forgot about that whoops. maybe dull the earpink a ittle and define the haunch shading. 01:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? This is lovely. .o.

Approved. 21:24, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Swiftflight (W) -Approved
Okay? Okay. 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC

Define the ear pink and lighten the shading just a few ticks.

Re-upped I was just doing that lol. Much, much happier 08:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit more? Nice. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 10:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

define the tail shading. 14:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The leg shading too^^ all 4. 06:08, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 07:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved. 21:24, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Birchface (W) - Approved
Welp.

he looks a little green to me, maybe make him a bit more orange or something idk 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a tad more brown, like one tick or two. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love this image so much.

Define the shading on the paws farthest from us, if there is any. 00:03, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

It might just be my terrible eyesight, but maybe define the light a touch more on the tail. He's sexy c: 02:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

define the shading a bit pretty much everywhere, i can't see it. this is lovely tho Jayce .o. 21:33, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. Meh.

CBA? Sexykittycat 05:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Approved.

Reedshine (MV) (W) -Approved
-cough- bae -cough- 02:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. 07:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main part of the body.

Can you make her darker please? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named File:Reedshine (MV).warrior.png, (I've renamed it for you, but keep this in mind for the future) as there's more than one Reedshine and we have no proof whatsoever that they're anywhere near the same cat.

Sorry, I forgot there were 2 Reedshines. 23:21, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make her a bit darker? Given that she's dark orange and all.

Blur the ear pink near the tip touching the fur? 12:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

^^maybe like a burnt orange. Also I don't know if it's just my eyes but it appears the tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. Wonderful job! 20:18, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up 00:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Put a bit of shading under the chin and blur the shading around the head. Also, smudge the bottom of the ear-pink a touch more 02:36, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

I hate to say this, but now that Reedshine is confirmed to be the same cat as the other one, is this image necessary? ;,; 13:04, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

it wasn't confirmed that they were the same so this image still stays,  anyways define th shading 21:26, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the cite is for the cats mentioned around the time of SkyClan's exile, which are the ones listed in Firestar's Quest. There's nothing about Reedshine anywhere near that.

So sorry, Tiger ;.; Anyway, mind smoothing out the shading just a bit? This is a gorgeous image. 00:12, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped. 03:01, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Gorgeous. 05:01, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Approved.

Beetail (D) - Approved
DD 04:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

he looks ginger, can you make him a bit less orange? 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Much happier now. 07:48, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes a tad? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought it looked fine but whatever 10:19, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs a little? 10:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

What color are your pale parts? They look...kinda pink. Nevermind, that's my laptop- it's horribly miscalibrated right now.

Re-uploaded 12:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts do look kind of pink to me on my laptop, which is more reliable than my phone for colors and what I trust. Would you mind changing it a tad? 11:39 Wed Mar 25

Define shading a tad?--Russettail13 (talk) 22:38, March 26, 2015 (UTC)Russett

Re-uploaded 11:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the pale parts do actually look a bit pink 20:42, 03/25/2015

Define a d smudge the ear-pink a touch 02:37, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Completely redid the base color. 07:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 05:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Approved.

Nettlepaw (MV) (A) - Approved
These edit conflicts burn. I saw the waste, I'll fix it next upload. 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome. :D I love those pale rings on the tail. Could you lighten the shading on the chin and the throat a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Damn I wanted this lol. Mind smoothing out the shading on the legs? 00:30, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Spoiler alert! :) He looks a bit gold rather than ginger, can you make him a tad more ginger? I could be wrong but the tabby stripes seem golden. Gorgeous! 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorry Stealth, but I colorpicked off of a photo of a real life ginger cat (This one). It's just my shading that makes it look golden :/ I dulled the highlights slightly, though, so maybe that'll fix the problem? 10:33, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad bit on the face/muzzle, it looks more like a marking than shading. That might just be me, though. 01:38 March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink more pinky? It looks more white right now than pink. This is gorgeous, wonderful job Shinxy! 20:23, March 25, 2015 (UTC)\

the earpink is fine actually, though I do agree facial shading can be lightened. 21:30, 03/26/2015

Sorry it took so long woooah whats with the colored highlights in the editor?? 22:20, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth just a little bit and I think this is ready. 05:08, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I think the eyes are fine. I'd think we can just go to the CBA.

Approved. 15:56, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstar (MV) (L) - Approved
shading black cats more like nope 00:56, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Please define the shading. 07:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

the shading is leaking about the haunch, and perhaps blur it a bit more. Define the light on the tail and front leg to our right 20:39, 03/25/2015

Re-uploaded 22:59, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I know people are telling you this Back and Fourth, But my screen see's her as dark grey, not black. Could you darken her? 00:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She's the same shade as all the black cats I've done previously, if I darken her anymore, you won't be able to see the lineart at all, so no, sorry. 01:01, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She's plenty dark enough, tbh. I actually would like to CBA this.

Approved.

Myler (KP) ~ Approved
???? 0:55 Thu Mar 26

Define the tail shading just a bit and I am going to steal that collar and run with it goodbye.

Re-uploaded. Pff... fine. ;D 1:29 Thu Mar 26

Smudge the shading more on the legs. 04:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Anywhere in particular? 20:46 Thu Mar 26

His front leg mainly, just a bit. This is gorgeous. 00:09, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. :) 20:57 Fri Mar 27

Let's CBA this even if the collar has been stolen bc it's sexy 03:27, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 04:50, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenwing (MC) ~ Approved
I'll probably redo the earpink later 00:10, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! There's waste near the herbs. Also mind lightening him up just a little bit so that the shading can be a bit more visible? 00:29, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

He's black, not dark gray. Please do not lighten him anymore. He'll just be tweaked later to be darker. I actually think darkening the shading and perhaps playing with your shading and highlight layers might solve the problem.

Define the ear pink? 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I just read the book poor him. Make the eyes a tad darker please. 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes are actually fine. 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

lel he deserved it, anyway add some shading or something to the herbs so they dont look flat. 14:46, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I pretty much redid most of this because I lost the layered file. 1:11 25 Mar. 2015 (UTC)

This should say "For Evaulation" since you are a kit, but no need to change it. I'll promote you since you know what you are doing. 02:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more, please. 06:17, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 19:37, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you please lighten him up very slightly, I can't see any of the lineart. 06:55, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope this isn't too gray now. 19:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

lighten him a tiny bit more, still can't see any lineart 21:31, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. I'm not lightening it anymore after this. 23:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. 00:14, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit as well. 13:53, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:50, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? I'd can't see anything wrong with this tbh. 03:32, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Approved 07:42, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstar (L) - Approved
So happy I finally got my first leader image. :D I'm really happy with how he turned out - I tried to make him look like a burmese cat, but I think the darker face kind of got lost in the shading. Ah well. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:16, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink :3 So much like an oak tree, so beautiful(like I said in the chat) 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Wow! Looks Great! It's fur looks so much like oak!

I see the earpink fine, tbh 02:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very well done! Can you define the legs shading? 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading too, please. ^^

Along with define it, could you blur the tail shading a little bit? I can see it, but it looks hard-edged. 15:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the muzzle shading a bit? It almost looks like he has a rope tied around it xD like a muzzle. Lovely image, I love the way you did the texture. =) 06:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his base color just a tad if he's dark brown. Smudge the tail shade just a bit more. 04:57, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

tail shading is fine tbh 21:32, 03/26/2015

Darkened the coat color (didn't realize Oakstar was dark brown) and smudged the muzzle shading a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:27, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 03:35, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Approved 07:44, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Alt. W) - Approved
- Basically the same as her warrior, just blurred the eye colors together and made the pupil dark brown instead of black. I haven't gotten a chance to read MV, so idk if she has scars by her eyes or not. 21:35, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

maybe make it almost white so its more noticable? I think her eyes would have ended up something like those blind cats that have silvery/milky white eyes, but maybe milky yellow or something. idk im bad at explaining 01:57, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'm just asking but if she was injured by the snake then shouldn't she have a red mark on her face? Otherwise it looks like there's no difference. 04:23, March 28, 2015 (UTC)


 * Normally, I would add scars, but there's nothing in her description that suggests that she acquired scars. then again... I haven't read MV yet..   05:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She was injured by the adder, which caused her blindness (and she died from it, I think), so... I believe adding some form of scars would be acceptable to differentiate between the normal image and after she was injured.

Re-uploaded 14:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the pink around her eyes more and maybe just make the eyes a tad more white perhaps. 17:44, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on her front right leg and the light on her right back leg 03:25, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

This was literally just approved- all Scarlet did was edit the normal warrior's eyes. The shading is fine as it is- if there was an issue, that should have been said when the other image was up.

Re-uploaded 20:53, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 02:36, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. 05:33, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Eeltail (MV) (Warrior) ~ Approved
Lil' Tabby 17:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a tad? Russettail13 (talk) 18:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Add a touch more light to the fronts of the forelegs and top of the tail 21:12, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:51, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it looks a little grayish and it's hard to see. 21:17, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 13:42, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think this is the tom blank, and it needs to be the she-cat blank. 15:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

But doesn't it confirmed that he is the same Eeltail who appeared in Code of the clans? 16:37, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

As far as I can tell, it was decided that Vicky was only talking about the cats who were from Firestar's Quest, not any of the other books. I asked Kate on her blog, but it hasn't been posted yet. For now, at least, it should probably be a she-cat blank. 18:48, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay 18:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the shading on the back legs. 03:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 15:02, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

This lovely kitty deserves a CBA. 00:12, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Approved 06:18, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Deerdapple (W) - Approved
Sweet 22:12, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Can you lighten the base color a bit, please? 22:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more 01:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define head shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 01:52, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Define the shape of the ear pink. I can kinda see it, but at the same time, I can't.

define the shading everywhere a tad 11:36 Wed Mar 25

Reups thanks, Tiger~ 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's silver, lighten up the base color just a little more. 00:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 02:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and I think this would be ready (not like it's my choice but this looks awesome =) 11:06, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. Given that she's a silver tabby (basically tbh), I think you can get away with using pure black (or one/two shades off) for the stripes. ^^

Reups 21:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved 13:01, March 31, 2015 (UTC)