Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Specklepaw (Ki) - Redone
OA was Ravensong, redone for multiple issues. 01:12, 06/7/2014

Define the shading a bit? 01:23, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

reup 18:44, 06/7/2014

Is there neck shading??? I can't see it if there is any.

Make sure the shading going down the legs is consistent and follows all the way down- on the left leg (our left), the shading seems to stop at the chest and come back only at the paw, and same for the other leg a bit. It would follow all the way down, and maybe add some shading to show that the chest and face aren't totally flat either. 20:13, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) - Tweaked
Added another layer of shading. OA was Rowan. Changes are here. 20:47, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Same as below. 03:29, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Sunfish (Ki) - Tweaked
Same as above. Changes are here. 20:51, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading to the parts that wouldn't be hit by any light at all. 22:53, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading. 03:28, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Snooky (A) ~ Tweaked
tried a shading tweak 23:58, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a little more. 03:29, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Wow, he looks super gray. Mind maybe trying to fix that if possible? If not, that's cool.

Brightspirit (Star) - Tweaked
So, apparently when I was tweaking the shading, I accidentally deleted the layer with the original stripes, so I had to go back to one of the other layers I had with less stylized stripes. I also have my original idea for Brightspirit, if anyone would rather I go with that instead. ouo

I like the stripes better on your original image, but i think it looks better if the stripes on her forehead go as far down as they go on this one (im horrible at explaining things lol sorry) Amazing charart :)

Stonefur (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA be Teldy, tweaked for shading. Added a new layer of shaying, and tweaked the forepaws shading a bit. Comments? 23:57, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

What's up with the chest??? It seems a lot lighter than the rest of the image.

Its the same color as the rest of the image, but it appears lighter because I blurred it less so the shading wouldn't creep away (as much, since this position is very unfortunate for a highlight =P) 00:17, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

It looks so weird. Please try and fix that. It seems like he has a lighter chest, and the older version didn't have that lighter area.

re-up 00:31, June 11, 2014 (UTC)