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Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o  ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either.

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  -  Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 20:09, 10/24/2014

Re-uploaded - I tried x3 -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll work on it, in a few hours. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

You see the shading that's on...uh, I want to say the lower back? Pretty sure that's what that is... can you smooth that out a bit? I'm not sure the smudges should be so visible.

Re-uploaded - shshsh-ading, dun dun dun. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  10:49, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy on the tail. 11:00 Mon Oct 27

It actually looks blotchy all over^^ give it all a little blur or smudge over..whichever you do. 22:37, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Should be slightly better but it may appear blotchy because that's how I shade... ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:16, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Try using Gaussian blur (if you don't already/don't blur shading) 1:33 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

Re-uploaded - I do use Gaussian blur, but I did it on this one, but the shading messed up. So I've tried to blur it as much as I can without messing it up. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

What opacity are you blurring on? For blurring shading I usually just put it on 100(the highest setting on GIMP). Blur it some more. If you were not already, try blurring on 100 opacity. 13:28, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

I blur it on 30. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred with opacity on 100 before turning it back down to 30. Hopefully I can master this. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's looking good! Define the tail shading some more. 03:59, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the shading on the haunch and face could use more blurring/smudging. 12:46, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I never realized what a pain, shading on solid cats was. In the future I think I'll stick to tabbies and such. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  13:17, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

oOPS, i'll fix the face later ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   13:19, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on this ---> paw and blur the shading on this <--- paw. 14:32, November 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out. 3:03 PM, Sun Nov 2, 2014

Re-uploaded - the gaussian blur is everywhere -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:45, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the light on the paws. 20:26, 11/4/2014

Re-uploaded - This shading is KILLING ME xD -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   20:35, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste by (her) left paw, and the shading is leaking from the lineart a bit on the side. 22:15, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - You must have eagle vision, I couldn't even see it until I squinted.. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   16:34, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add a highlight onto the left shoulder, the shading there looks a bit strange with the way the lights going. Also, can you define the tail shading a bit? Brick  The Bite of '87  17:17, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - DUN, I swear if someone tells me to tweak the shading I'll scream. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:37, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is looking a little blotchy; try either blurring/smudging it to smooth it out a bit? Also, there should be more shading on the face, and the tail and paw's shading could be defined a bit. im sorry. -- 22:32, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, first of I uploaded an old file stupid me, second of all I'll work on it tomorrow and finally I am screaming   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:33, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the nose pink, so I suggest putting some nose pink. 02:54, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Actually tiger, s/he shouldn't put any nosepink on this image. It's a black (Well, dark gray) cat. They usually have black noses. 13:36, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - more screaming I couldn't find the old file (probably didn't save it) scrapped the shading and re-did it; the changes are here - http://oi60.tinypic.com/103h6wy.jpg   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   17:09, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and strengthen the shading on the paws. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:17, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened shading, strengthened paw shading (made it darker there) and I changed the position of the eyes, which I think have made quite the difference. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   11:38, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm.. define the tail shading. Also, I think the area near the nearest leg has receding shading. 20:18, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Defined tail shading, and expanded shading on nearest leg. Think I'm getting the hang of shading... — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   11:06, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

The shading seems to be bleeding away from the edge of the belly. Maybe smudge it back towards the line? Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:57, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on the left front leg is blotchy, smooth it out a little? 15:52 Tue Nov 11

Withdrawing because of work. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   21:58, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I'll take over. I changed the heading for you :)  17:23 Thu Nov 13

Reups 18:05 Thu Nov 13

Lighten the shading, and possibly blur it. I spy a tiny bit of shading leaking from the lineart on the bottom of the side. 22:18, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 16:50 Fri Nov 14

Lighten up the shading on the flank and define the light on the tail. 16:15 Sun Nov 16

Reups 16:52 Sun Nov 16

Lighten the shading on the back and tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ CBA
this is rubbish. Sooooo rubbish. 19:33 Thu Oct 23

Lighten up the front paws a bit and the shading. It's fine ^^ Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 19:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks 19:40 Thu Oct 23

Lol did you forget the earpink? I don't see a trace of it anywhere. 20:00, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

The base color appears to be a little bit darker than her kit and apprentice (both of which I made), so have a screenshot of an unshaded head from the apprentice for the coloring.

Blur the shading some, it looks blotchy. 13:26, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I kinda like this.....I accidently deleted the ear-pink layer before I saved :'D 16:28 Fri Oct 24

I'd say to add a little more earpink. Its really nice, though ^^ 16:47, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Nah I think she has enough on there. A lot of images have been approved with that type of earpink style. 18:10, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups You saw it when it had been reuploaded, Frosty lmao 18:19 Sat Oct 25

Define the shading depth a tad, and I think the shading is receding from the lineart in some places. 17:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, changes might be showing, or they could be not. IDK <span style="">17:39 Sun Oct 26

Hm it looks like you darkened the shading. Defining the depth of the shading does include dakening, but it is really about adding different dimensions to it. So maybe you could lighten it back up a shade, and then where the body is farthest from the light, darken it; In crevices, in between 2 body parts, wherever the farthest parts are from the light, that's kind of where you give it a little darken. I hope this helps. =) 12:36, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I think I did this right? <span style="">13:02 Mon Oct 27

Reups, blurred the shading <span style="">18:13 Mon Oct 27

The one back paw looks pretty black. Lighten it up a bit 13:57, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, ran the dodge tool over it a few times <span style="">14:05 Tue Oct 28

It appears the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back. 23:27, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <span style="">23:15, 10/29/2014

If you're still working, would you also define the depth of the tail shading? It looks flat. 22:28, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the front legs shading, and could you possibly blur/smudge the earpink just a tad bit more?-- 22:34, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

the shading is receding from the lineart, and can you smooth it out? it looks blotchy. 01:25, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but it's been a week without uploads, Amber. You know the rules, and I gotta decline this. =(

I'll take over. 03:48, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

You don't appear to have reupped this, Shoon. Are you still working? 12:00, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry if I'm doing this wrong it's been a week since you said you're taking over, Shoon, sorry, but this'll have to be declined. Does anyone mind me taking over this? Sorry, I made a mistake. My apologies. 16:38, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

You can have it. I'm not in a mood to fight with the shading anymore, it really doesn't wanna cooperate. 20:45, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, I'll take over. 21:21, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes should show later 22:46, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the body shading, please.

I hate making you do this, but define the shading on the upper part of the tail? 11:17, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes be here 16:43, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the body shading a tad more? Not much. 09:55, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reups This is as far as I'm willing to go, otherwise it'll look too flat. 18:37, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receding from the back. Fix that and I'll CBA this. 17:29, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reups yay 19:51, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

CBA, as promised? <span style="">16:15 Sun Nov 16

Snake (DotC) (Alt Ro) ~ For Approval
I don't like how this came out. =P -- 01:21, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

It looks fine don't beat yourself up lol. Define the texture a little, and define your lightsource. The head is telling me it's coming from one direction, and the body another, and the tail another. 12:59, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Texture is fine. <span style="">20:27, 11/6/2014

Texture looks alright to me, though it could be darkened a smidge. I agree about the lightsource though. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:29, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think if you just removed the shading along the back (but left a bit behind the head near the neck) that the light source would be fine. <span style="">20:32, 11/6/2014

Re upped  01:05, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

blur/smudge/whatever you do the shading on the neck and belly a bit <span style="">21:18, 11/9/2014

Reupped 22:20, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading.

Define the light on the face - liking the texture! 16:31, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped 23:19, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Hm, correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't there also be shading on parts of his back? Like, near his tail and extending a little more past the neck? I could be wrong, and if I am, I'm sorry. Also, please define the light on the legs; I don't think they'd all be in shade.

Re upped I defined the light on the legs. I didn't change the shading because I did that and other users said it made the light source confusing. 00:16, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Littlebird (Star) ~ For Approval
Her name is cute:3 Changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/141112C/ezimba12232517187600.png 20:51, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

haha I wanted this. define the tail shading. This is lovely! =) 20:58, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on both visible front paws, please.

Re-ups Thanks Frosty:) 15:10, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I thought Fuzzywing had her reserved? (still a good charart though ^^) 15:42, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Fuzzywing's reservation expired I believe ^^ I think Sziri's alright. 20:43, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Yup, Darkfrost is correct. I had actually removed that the other day (or yesterday, I can't remember), I believe. They got one week from the reservation date, but they hadn't posted, so their reservation expired. Hmm, now to the image.. could you still define the shading on <-- visible front paw, please?

Define the shading on the chest? — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:01, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 16:42, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight/shading near the neck- it appears a tad too sharp, so if you wouldn't mind smoothing that out, then I think we could even CBA this. I quite like it and the image is looking beautiful.

Re-ups Thank you!:) Also,when will i become a warrior?I have more than 3 pictures approved. 19:42, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

...right now. IDK why you aren't a warrior already. 07:32, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Star) ~ For Approval
eh..colorpicked from elder. Comments? 23:27, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the main part of the body. Also give more depth to the eyes and smudge the ear pink into the ear a bit more.

The shading is throwing off the color a little bit; could you lighten it a tad? If you'd prefer not too, thats fine with me. 23:39, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Lol wow I just realized you all were staring at the old version of the image for 24 hrs. I'm so sorry, I didn't notice that mine didn't overwrite the prev. version. I tried re-uploading it and here's a link to ezimba for my version. 13:15, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Yours had been showing, and my comment still stands about the ear pink- please smudge it a bit more.

Well they hadn't for me. I'll re-upload later if I've got time. Is the shading better? I had changed it after you commented but then I saw the old version when I got on so I'd thought you were looking at the old. 14:43, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I think the shading should actually extend the rest of the way, like to where the base of the tail is. I've never seen a source that looks like that put up for approval.

Holly (Q) ~ CBA
let there be prickles 07:16, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Bwahaha it's another cursed image! may you define the earpink a little more in <--- this ear please? I can't really see it. 17:50, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

I doubt it's cursed. I just wanted a different image, as did Jayie. It's not as bad as Frost lmao. Maybe smudge/blur/whatever you do to your shading near the tufts of fur to smooth them out?

re-uploaded aint no way im giving up an oppurtunity for lineart editing 22:26, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? I see nothing wrong with this. <span style="">16:17 Sun Nov 16

Purdy (K) ~ For Approval
He's so adorable~  Anyways, he probably doesnt match stripe-wise, but eh. Couldnt get ahold of any of his files. But have a Purdykit c: 23:09, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Hailstar (K) ~ For Evaluation
He's so cute :). Burntclaw (talk) 09:03, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded couldn't find the xcf file for it so I had to redraw it :/Burntclaw (talk) 09:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Hum... The shading seems a bit misplaced, there is some shading on his left cheek. Correct me if I'm wrong. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:04, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. By the way, I accidentally used my sister's account to re-upload the picture, so it will say it has been re-uploaded by The Fox Girl. Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups removed some waste.

Darken the base coat a tad, and define the light on the legs. <span style="">12:56 Sun Nov 16

Re-uploaded I'm pretty sure the coat color was fine... Cause I color picked from his apprentice version, but I darkened it like you said so. I also defined the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 13:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. <span style="">13:13 Sun Nov 16

Just removed it as soon as I realized after the re upload :'D Burntclaw (talk) 13:16, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy, smooth it out? <span style="">13:17 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups. Is it better? Burntclaw (talk) 13:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

It still looks rather blotchy; you can try blurring it with the blur tool at rate 100 instead of using gaussian blur, and it's causing some of the shading to recede at the lineart. I can't see where your light source is, either. Also, there's waste all around the image. <span style="">16:22 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups Completely re-did the shading. Never realized shading was so complicated :'D. Also removed all of the waste. Burntclaw (talk) 04:11, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's still waste The Fox Girl (talk) 04:30, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Burntclaw (talk) 05:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Give the shading a good blur/smudge. Look at examples of other solid coloured cats for help. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure if I overdid it. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Emberkit (CJ) (Star) - Declined
好可怜的猫 :( Had lots of fun drawing this :) The Fox Girl (talk) 05:00, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Unfortunately, Emberkit doesn't get a StarClan image- we don't know what rank she was when she died. The StarClan kit blanks are for kits younger than six moons at the time of their death- like Mosskit, Hollykit, Larchkit, ect. Emberkit could have gone on to be an apprentice, warrior, elder, ect, before she died. Based on that, I'm going to have to decline this. We decided this a while ago- she and her siblings (Webkit, Hatchkit, and Mistlekit) won't get StarClan images despite their being a post-death citation for them. We have nothing that tells us what rank they were when they died.