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Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more.

can you define the eye depth? 02:15 Wed Jun 12

Dsfine the light source in the < ear  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more  Ellie  life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened the shading depth  21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg

Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat?

Reuploaded  16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.

Reuploaded  23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit.

14:38, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:48, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some light to the chest and legs, add some depth so it doesn't seem flat like it is on the legs and chest area  Ellie  life is an illusion 15:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll add light to the chest and shading depth, but Mink, this is the exact same way the legs are on the source I mentioned above, with the exception of the bounce light. 16:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did the things I mentoned. 16:06, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still looks flat, and should also be made to curve on the face instead of go in a line straight down. Also, same comment for the earpink color as on the kit

I get there shouldn't be light down there since I've used this source before, but it shouldn't look so flat as it is does. There should be depth. Adding some shading light should help add depth to the lighter parts of the shading there as well as some darker bits, like Blackstar has. The haunch is also leaking  Ellie  life is an illusion 17:51, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the light source to Bouncefire's.  20:42, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch could be swooped downward to encompass the curve (basically putting the shading on the lower haunch and connecting it), and removing some from the tail tip because there wouldn't be as much. 21:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:25, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, it should be on the bottom of the tail, iirc.  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:01, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire's source has the shading on top of the tail, not the bottom. 14:06, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire is a tabby, its not seen as prominent as this. As some others have probably said. One shading on another character might not work for another. The source contradicts the shading on the tail, it should be on the bottom as its inconsistent with it on the top. It doesn't make sense when the light is coming from > and the shading is where there should be light.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:55, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The shading can also be smoothed, too. 21:11, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploadeddddd again fixing a few things. 22:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

that bit thats still on the top should be curveddown as well  Ellie  life is an illusion 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded herpaderpderp  22:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

That's not what I meant, I'll give a redline inna minute. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

here, this is basically what im getting from you shading source so i did a redline. As well as fixing that, lighten and smooth your shading. It could use quite a bit of smoothing <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:25, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the tint to blue. I like this one better. 00:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Curve up the haunch shading so it shows off the shape of the thigh. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded rip I tried  01:07, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the line of shading going across the thigh. I think what Mink was referring to was curving the shading downward to encompass the bottom of the thigh. And smooth the shading, too. 01:10, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think the best way for the shading to go is to have a look at the updated shading chart, as it shows the two most common sources that users have been using for the warrior blanks + kits.

Reuploaded double rip, matched to tutorials. 02:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the over all shading a bit, then on the back line art the shading is very faint, define that? 15:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

That spot of shading still looks fairly light compared with the rest of the shading, making it look inconsistent. Could you make it match in depth more? I think the depth could be defined on both front legs and the face - perhaps expand it to go under the chin? Smooth it by the bend in the tail, it looks blotchy, and the haunch and shoulder shading could be smoothed some more as well. 23:45, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix the shading more tomorrow. 01:28, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the haunch shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:41, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:10, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the back and blur the transition more 23:12, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:19, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste by the back paws and >> ear; and I also think the shading should be smoothed.

Reuploaded tried using a pressured opacity smudge brush  20:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is a little bit blotchy at the top of the flank <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 09:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:37, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still very blotchy on the flank, shoulder, haunch and tail. 19:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded what even is that shoulder shading anymore. 20:14, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still appears to be blotchy in the areas Vec mentioned. Could you expand the shading more on the haunch and define it in the ears? 02:00, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:09, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch, shoulder, and flank some more as it is still very blotchy. 03:02, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, this is the last time I'm changing the source and the shading on this one. This source is A+. 03:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. Expand it on the back foot and the face. It also looks like it cuts off on the front leg closest to us, can you fix that? 16:51, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Hey, I figured I'd note - please do try to make this the last time. This is the fifth time source's been overhauled via upload history, and each time it is, it negates all the comments before, extends the process, and is largely a waste of time for all the people who left comments beforehand. It's never really said, but it's never changed so much as to be an issue; I'm not alone in that we're all happy when it improves, and gets pretty close to done, and then poof.

Reuploaded Okay. 21:49, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the belly and tail shading. <span style="">22:57 Wed Jun 26

Reuploaded  00:27, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add shading to the lower section of the foot?

There would not be any shading there with my source. This was used on other images. 03:01, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the bottom portion of the <--- front limb? Underneath the blocked shading. It seems very cut off. 16:25, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

That's actually intentional. It's part of my source. 16:10, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think some should be added there, in some form. It's been mentioned by three leads now, four including me, to which we concur it looks cut off.

Reuploaded  17:15, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again tried adding depth to the front legs  17:22, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

If you're using the source I think you are, which multiple other images have, there would be more shading on the visible back foot.

Same comment as Frostclaw. The shading overall can be smoothed a lot, and possibly darken the shading on the hindpaw furthest from us? 21:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:26, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

All the shading still needs to be smoothed more. 13:20, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:09, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (Ki) - For Approval
I think it's fine if I pick this back up? if its not lmk. I kind of stopped working bc i got sick and its hard for me to draw when I'm sick.. I still kind of am, but i'm feeling far better and so I created this demon. This time I got the original file for the kit. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste above the back <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:38, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups wasteus deletus <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up. Perhaps reupload again? 01:07, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

It's now showing up. 01:31, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add some more brown spots near the shoulder, just looking at the Hunter's side for reference.

Still working?

mhm im reupping when I get to the computer tonight <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:09, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

reups <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up again. Try reuploading once more? 02:01, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 16:26, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Ugh wikia why are you so stupid,, I'll see if I can get it to show when I'm on the PC now that life's finally out of the way <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:16, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

i think it should be better <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:11, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail?

Frostclaw (W) - For Approval
Fluffy girl  22:10, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the overall shading, and define it on the ears and upper head?

Reuploaded  22:30, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 17:57, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:55, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading a little above the rectangle shading piece on the forleg so it connects to the shoulder/upper forearm shading some more? Seems very abrupt atm 21:18, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:48, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Very nice! I feel that the shading by the bend of the tail could be removed, so then you'd just have the patch of shading on the bottom, then one by the base. Not sure, it just looks off to me? Smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us, on the bottom of the tail, chest, and a bit on the haunch. 02:12, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:26, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading/smooth it out please 05:44, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:46, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

looking good, its nice to see how much you've improved in a short amount of time :) could you smooth the shading out a bit more on the chest, it looks prety hard edged there 02:39, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt! 23:27, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Same comment as dawnflower about the block of shading on the <--- foreleg. 16:29, June 27, 2019 (UTC) Read Dawnflower. It's intentional. 16:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded per Spooky on Dawnflower  17:16, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again depth to front legs  17:23, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

The overall shading could be smoothed, quite a lot. 17:31, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:26, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

shading still needs to be smoothed out. 13:51, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:09, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Evaluation
Haven't been here for a while! :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png) 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left.

Reuploaded~ :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears? 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:29, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Blend the texture in the shading more. Flip the shading on < this ear to the other side, to comply with your light source. Can you also smooth out the shading as well? To soften it up and make it more of a gradient. 02:38, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  04:15, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 15:37, June 23, 2019 (UTC)

This might be a repeat of the comment above, but maybe define the shading placement? Especially on the flank, upper shoulder and chest area. Right now it looks like it's all over the place atm. 00:46, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:31, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, tail, and front legs. The shading on the back also appears to be leaking, and the shading, over all, could be smoothed. 14:43, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:34, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Much better! Swap the shading on the bend of the tail to the top to comply with your source. 00:35, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded like this? :P <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:17, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Not quite, Crystal. Not only would the shading be on top of that bend, that whole bend of the tail area would be in shadow. Can you also define the eye depth more? 23:00, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now? :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:37, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste along the back, underneath the tail, and underneath the paws. Could you define the light (remove some of the shading) on the tail? Seems to be covered in just shading. 15:31, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  00:40, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Here is a redline of what you shading should look like on the tail. Red is where it all has to be in shadow, and orange is where the light needs to be definned. 00:51, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:52, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

The light on the tail could still be defined a bit more in the area potato mentioned. It should be the same color as the lighted parts on the main body. 16:32, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  02:30, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth out the tail shading some? this is cute! <span style="">16:53 Fri Jun 28

try and remove the waste floating around the image^^

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  03:23, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light again on >>> this side of the tail, and it's leaking a bit there too. 16:11, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  ''<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  10:45, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Grasspelt (W) - For Approval


00:59, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Add just a teeny bit of shading under her chin, and connect the back and shoulder shading (if that makes no sense let me know)

smooth the main body shading a smidge? <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 04:34, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps expand the shoulder shading so it meets with the rest on the back/neck? 14:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Really minor but his eyes look black to me. Would it be possible to lighten the main eye color a bit? 14:48, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Some leaking shading on the bottom of the tail. 15:50, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i tried

17:40, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some shading on the stomach? 16:54, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded it was there so i just expanded it

19:28, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

Ah, sorry, I meant the stomach area between the haunch and foreleg that's peeking out on the flank. And maybe some underneath the chin, too, a bit. 16:11, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

21:55, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 05:31, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

sorry to break, but i feel like the shading is pretty rough along the spine. 05:25, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt. K) - For Approval
All colors from the original kit. Man, that stripe was fun. 02:37, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the stripe, add more depth to the shading, and extend the earpink 03:53, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the haunch shading a bit as well? 14:47, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:41, June 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink a bit more, and the shoulder and haunch shading. 02:37, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:52, June 25, 2019 (UTC)

Shading in general could still be smoothed more^^

Reuploaded  00:35, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

It's still a touch too sharp, imo, if you could smooth it. It's more of making it a gradient so the edges aren't so apparent

Reuploaded I indeed can  16:18, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Still could use some smoothing out on the neck and face, imo.

Reuploaded  21:30, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Snail Shell (W) - CBA
<span style="">18:21 Tue Jun 25

For lack of better words, on the haunch, the gray spots seem to jump off the base a bit more, vs. on the other images/prior version they seem more muted in contrast

Reuploaded I softened them overall, so hopefully it helped <span style="">14:00 Sun Jun 30

That works. CBA?

Morningflower (W) - For Approval
<span style="">18:21 Tue Jun 25

do you want the file? can you smooth out the black patches a little/cover them more with the lighter texture? 03:09, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Just to be safe, probably should. Just use one of the emails on my userpage ^^ <span style="">23:21 Thu Jun 27

Reuploaded I'm prob going to mess with it more, just uploading so I don't forget <span style="">14:03 Sun Jun 30

can you make the lighter texture less uniform? (will probably need to fix that on the elder eek .-.) 14:29, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Frogtail (W) - For Approval
yuh <span style="">03:16 Wed Jun 26

Define/thicken the shading on the haunch and front legs?

reuploaded also redid the eyes bc they were weird <span style="">18:43 Wed Jun 26

Add some shading to the hind leg closest to us? 03:06, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded there was some shading already there but i thickened it some <span style="">16:51 Fri Jun 28

CBA? 18:02, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but i think the shading right now could be smoothed out and expanded a little bit. 14:26, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

also, shading should be added/defined on the tail. 14:27, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded its like the shading loses all its dimension when uploaded. i actually did a lot of expansion but i feel like you can't even see the difference <span style="">20:56 Mon Jul 1

Fernstripe (W) ~ For Approval
Dont you love when you dont have to match stripe patterns because the one side never shows on the other chararts ^o^

23:06, June 26, 2019 (UTC)

Going by the apprentice, the stripes look a little softer and lighter in colour?

Could you also define the pupils? 03:02, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you soften the shading?

Reuploaded

11:14, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading transition on the ---> foreleg? 16:14, June 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

02:35, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Bess (K) - For Approval
Tinystream (talk) 20:41, June 27, 2019 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a bit.

Reup Tinystream (talk) 15:45, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? This is cute! 18:02, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but could you brighten up the white a bit more? it still looks gray, especially on the face. 14:25, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure how I'm supposed to make it any brighter, considering most of the white is in shading (Light source is top right).. should I lessen the shading? Tinystream (talk) 14:34, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

feel like adding a bit of highlight on the muzzle would help with the face 15:03, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Magpie (Ki) - CBA
one of my oldest patterns that I might eventually tweak some day. STILL one of my favorite minor characters ever.

Such a cutie. Could you smudge the white (except for the tail) ever so slightly more? And I don't think there should be any white above the nose according to the loner. 18:08, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA?

Foxleap (W) Alt 2 - CBA
i like how this turned out <span style="">00:48 Sat Jun 29

Can you expand the shading on the tail and leg closest to us? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  03:03, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">04:08 Sat Jun 29

Could you add shading to the front leg?

can you lighten/smooth out the shading in general? 06:18, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the stripes on the older images popped out a bit more against the base; I'm not sure whether that was due to color or sharpness

reuploaded the shading looks a lot lighter in gimp rip. also i colorpicked the stripes from an unshaded spot so i sharpened them a little here <span style="">19:43 Sun Jun 30

CBA?

Twigbranch (W) - CBA
All colors from other images. Comments? 01:55, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Could you smooth out the overall shading, especially on the haunch?

Reuploaded. 19:09, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Finleap (W) ~ CBA
All colors from other images. Comments? 01:55, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tail lineart could be smoothed out a bit. 16:29, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:11, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

Could you crop the image on <--- side a bit? 18:09, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:12, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Minor thing, but could you define the shading on the stub of a tail? I really can't see any shading at all.

Reuploaded. 18:57, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Redwillow (W) Alt - For Approval
i cannot get this image to look right, solid cat woes <span style="">04:30 Sat Jun 29

Maybe remove the shading on the back, and perhaps lighten it a little to make it more a smooth gradient?

With this source, I think the shading on the front legs would be on our right and not our left. In addition, I think the shading could be expanded on all the legs and the chest, and I think the shading should be removed at the tail bend. 21:56, June 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded looking better <span style="">00:03 Sun Jun 30

can you make the shading on the tail look more organized? the shading on the first portion of the tail is leaking onto the second. also, with this light source, the shading on the left side of the face should be receded/removed or the shading ont he right side should be expanded. 14:35, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">19:39 Sun Jun 30

Hollyleaf (W) - For Approval


00:17, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

looking at her other images, her eyes should be brighter. 15:01, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Hollytuft (W) - For Approval


00:17, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

looking at the kit, her eyes should also be brighter. 15:05, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Flashnose (Ki) - CBA
00:26, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Flower Foot (W) - CBA
all colors are from the hunter image 00:27, June 30, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA?

Flower Foot (K) - CBA
all colors are from hunter image 00:27, June 30, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA?

Hopekit (K) ~ CBA
colors from the star's tweak file

CBA? 12:02, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reedclaw (W) ~ CBA
02:25, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:11, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (W) ~ CBA
Hootstar 03:30, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 12:02, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Sleek Fur (K) ~ For Approval
03:30, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tail shading, with this source, might just be on the bottom of the tail? Could be wrong tho

Reups Darkened the tint, too 18:39, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the < side of the front arm (the top part, anyways) looks a bit sharp

Reups Like this? 23:13, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (K) ~ CBA
can't see anything

CBA? 04:12, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Flowerstar (W) ~ CBA


CBA? 04:12, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) ~ CBA


CBA? 04:13, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Honeyfern (W) - CBA
matched the style to the warrior and apprentice, in which the warrior was the first image 06:37, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading ever so slightly? In some places, mainly the face, its a little hard to see

reup 13:28, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Goldenflower (K) - CBA
this is my favourite set ever - I love her so much

reuploaded forgot the ear fluff

CBA?

Dew (K) - For Approval
09:05, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

The old one had the torn ears - so I think this would need them too? Unless that cite for sure comes after being adulted

Harestar (K) - For Approval
Baby. i love him Tinystream (talk) 10:48, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken both brown markings (the ring, then the tailtip) just a little

Expand the brown on the front paw, and I believe the brown on the head could be expanded so it meets with the corner of his eye. 21:17, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Poppydawn (K) - CBA
There we go. <span style="">14:06 Sun Jun 30

CBA?

Troutclaw (K) - For Approval
15:00, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a bit of shading depth to the haunch?

Hawkfrost (K) ~ CBA
Did my best to match bramblestar 23:04, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Icewing (W) ~ For Approval


I don't know if it's just me, but her eyes look green, whereas they're cited blue. As far as I'm aware eye color alone isn't enough to start a tweak nom.

Reuploaded Haha they're definitely green so swapped - we switched the PC cite a while back and I guess the warrior never got updated, thus colorpicking resulted in green

Halftail (W) - CBA


CBA?

Jumper (K) - For Approval


The image doesn't appear to be showing the changes. 23:34, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

hopefully they're showing now

It is. 23:42, June 30, 2019 (UTC)

Honeyfur (Ki) - For Approval
I'm going to learn how to do tabbies if it kills me. 01:26, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes appear to be softer on the apprentice. Define the shading a bit on the yellow as well? 01:40, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

try and grab the colors from the old kit/warrior and see what you get; kit especially, that should hold the master colors, and the app always was a bit off

I will say I got the colors from the old warrior (which I tried to match because same side) except for the earpink, nose, and eyes, but I’ll take a look at the kit once I’m back home. 12:23, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Breezepelt (W) ~ For Approval


02:35, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading? 13:49, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just my eyes, but the hue of the black seems different than the other images? This is almost paler and reddish a bit. 15:46, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Vec. The base looks off as well, it's ligher and more brownish. 16:01, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:37, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Graystripe (Ki) ~ For Approval
Colors from kittypet

02:35, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe make him fluffier?

Reuploaded 12:00, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Duskfur (W) ~ For Approval
03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

You need to wait until your withdrawn ones are archived, since technically they're still yours. This time I'll archive it for you.

The ear pink looks brighter on the old warrior. 04:15, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Eaglekit (WC) (K) ~ For Approval
03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and maybe reduce some of the shading on the shoulder? 04:14, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the shading could be lightened slightly as well <span style="">21:00 Mon Jul 1

With this source, there would be shading on the jaw that connects to the neck shading. 21:24, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Frostfur (K) ~ For Approval
03:29, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Heathertail (W) - For Approval
04:40, July 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Harveymoon (W) - For Approval
14:04, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Yew Tail (W) ~ For Approval
All colors from other images. Comments? 16:48, July 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the shoulder and haunch 18:38, July 1, 2019 (UTC)