Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 105

Flailfoot (E) ~ Approved
Love black cats<333 Also, epic name is epic. And kitty hazel eyes<333 02:31, 07/2/2013

Hm...perhaps lighten the base just a tad. 08:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I disagree. I think it looks fine, as-is, and since he /is/ black, a base this dark is pretty good.

Define the shading; I can barely see it. 23:51, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 01:29, 07/3/2013

Comments before approval?

I'm sorry but I cannot see the lineart at all on the whole back end of him and on the bottom of his tail, could you just lighten him a small bit? 20:17, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but if that were the case, there'd have to be a tweak on Smudge's kittypet, because the lineart isn't that visible on him either. :/ 20:34, 07/3/2013

I can't even see the shading on this one, Ferk. It needs to be lightened a bit. 20:35, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

reuploaded 20:54, 07/3/2013

Let's try this again ouo And no saying it's too dark, since this is the color from Nightstar's elder. I gave it to her to use as a base

Sorry, but I'm a bit confuzzled as to where your light source is coming from because when looking at just the back, it's as if it's coming from above meanwhile when looking at the face, it looks like it's coming from the right. A quick fix would to be just add some shading at his rump encroaching on the left-behind side of the hindleg, and follow it through the spine connecting it with the neck shading (which is brilliant), but your choice. Awesome job, Fern! 03:13, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Still working on this? 20:42, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Yep, I'll reupload momentarily. 22:44, 07/9/2013

Reups 00:52, 07/10/2013

He looks dark gray right now and needs to be darkened a bit. The shading could also use some blurring.

Reuploaded. I'm not sure if changes are showing. 17:47, 07/10/2013

can I please get comments/cba on this so I can put more up? /shot 02:18, 07/11/2013

Be patient. I t had only been a few hours since your upload. .-. You can comment if your image has gone something like 24 hours or so without a comment, but just a few hours makes you look really impatient. People will comment when they can. No more of that please, got it? Anyways, saturate the earpink more, and possibly darken it more, as black cats tend to have pretty dark skin.

I believe the ear pink is fine, honestly. It's like that on other images, and that's around the shade I've used before for black cats.

I honestly think its fine, so CBA? 06:05, July 12, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.