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Brindlewing (W) ~ CBA
May fix this up a little later. 23:58, April 16, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs and maybe extend the belly shading? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 00:23, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:13, April 17, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the back some? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 04:47, April 19, 2018 (UTC)

While you're at it, can you smooth it out on the neck too?

Re-uploaded. 12:30, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the flank shading and hind leg, towards the back? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 14:04, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:21, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Gonna CBA this. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 14:22, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Fernstripe (W) - For Approval
This is ugly 22:06, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

Nonsense, this is beautiful! Define the tail shading and expand the shading on the hind leg a little? Maybe add a few more stripes to the neck too. 22:15, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

Lol, patch- I was commenting while you were. Anyways, this is bootiful!! Expand the neck shading some and add some more stripes on the end leg area? I don't know if it's me, but I can't seem to see the pupil? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 22:17, April 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think you could add some more stripes (especially in that blank area), because there seems to be more of them of her other images

Also, this is pretty minor, but I think the stripes are a bit thicker on the upper part of the tail (towards the tip) on the apprentice image than this one. 19:05, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate smudged shading. 21:26, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Bristlekit (TC) (K) ~ CBA
posting fresh section; I also took care of the comment already archived

Could you maybe make the earpink more visible? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 00:39, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded ended up changing the color

It's still a little hard to see. Maybe add some depth to it or make it slightly darker? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 14:23, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'd prefer not to change the color much more than this; the hue is irking me slightly but I guess it's more visible..

I don't see nothing else wrong with this, CBA? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 14:32, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Needletail (Unknown) - For Approval
I'll mess with the shading now. <span style="">13:59 Sun Apr 22

Define the ear pink? If you can't, that's fine. Also, this is an interesting source.... are you going to make one for the shading tutorial? =P If you're busy, that's cool w/ me. Wasn't quite sure how this blank should be shaded.

Extend the shading on some. I can do a tutorial tomorrow once I get back from a Florida. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 14:04, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Idk how I feel about this source lol <span style="">14:08 Sun Apr 22

Reuploaded I tweaked the texture and shading a bit <span style="">15:00 Sun Apr 22

Could you smooth out the shading? And add some lighter texture to it too and expand the tail shading? This is lovely! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:04, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, the way Sun has the texture is how I did it on the apprentice, I do believe.

Reuploaded Fixed lol. I'm shocked I haven't murdered my smudge tool by now lol <span style="">15:15 Sun Apr 22

Smooth out the hind leg shading along the base of the tail. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 18:53, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Beenose (Unknown) ~ For Approval
I love Beenose, but not the shading on this. <span style="">15:02, 4/22/2018

Desaturate the shading a little bit? <span style="">15:04 Sun Apr 22

You forgot to add some shading to the pure white spot on her chest. I also think the texture is more rough? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:05, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like it better now. :3 <span style="">16:58, 4/22/2018

Smooth the shading on the tail, belly and hind leg. 18:48, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

On the back as well. Also, there's an unfilled pixel (probably missing some shading) at the ---> end of the back shading. At one of the tips of the fur. 18:51, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Add a little bit of light on the tip of the tail, and maybe lighten the shading a very tiny bit

Re-uploaded. <span style="">19:56, 4/22/2018

Spikefur (Unknown) - For Approval
I like his base color okay. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">15:23, 4/22/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

I think the tufted fur should stick up and show more on the head and cheeks, like the other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 15:28, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Because of where the whiskers are, doing the top of the head itself isn't really all that possible for me. I made an attempt, though. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#872090; font-size:85%">16:13, 4/22/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#872090; font-size:86%">) ​

I think the shading is leaking from the ear lineart. In the <--- ear 18:52, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Mistcloud (Unknown) - For Approval
i've always wanted to do a spiky cat. all colors were picked from other images. 15:59, April 22, 2018 (UTC)

Just gonna slide in here and say that it should be "unknown", not "Unknown", due to the case-sensitive parts of the charart template. ^^ I've renamed it for you.

floofy. . . make some of the spikes more pointed? Some of them seem more rounded

Re-uploaded. shoot, sorry. i thought i named it with a lower case "u". thanks for moving it. 17:18, April 22, 2018 (UTC)