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Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink into the pelt, it looks like it cuts off very abruptly. 23:07, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

I think you could smooth out the shading on the main body and tail more. also, the shading is leaking on the legs. (Remember to blur the edges of the shading only so that it doesn't end up leaking)

The shading is leaking on the chest and where the tail-tip is over the body as well. Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 14:01, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Please reupload under File:Rockfall.star.png from now on, thank you. I've renamed it for you, but for future reference, please remember the naming guidelines that we have. They can be found above the reservation table on the main page.

Yep, I'm still working, I was out of town for a long time, so i had no accsess to my computer.

Reups.

The shading looks a little flat imo, and the fur needs to be smudged into the fur a bit. —   Fla      me    I can and I will  22:35, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Oops wrong file.Reuploaded.

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 23:53, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Can you Blur and lighten the shading more, the eyes are very nice. Belllastar (talk) 22:39, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Extending allowed deadline to December the 23rd due to image being more than 50% complete. 09:54, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Drizzle (ES) - For Approval
Love the name. Hate the texture though. Not sure it matches that well :/ 12:57, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you did pretty well matching it :) But the texture could stand to be lightened quite a bit, as it isn't that dark. Also the chest patch only goes down a little bit, and it's like a bib. 13:23, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the ear shading a tad? Looks very lovely :-) 02:58 Thu Dec 3 The white is to thick in my opinion, it looks like she has white streaked fur. --Belllastar (talk) 17:26, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just my screen, but I think the gray on the kit image might be a bit darker. 22:08, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 11:12, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I can get you the file from Storm if you need it Shinx? 13:43, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'd appreciate that :) 14:24, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

tbh it looks great without it. CBA? 10:02, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Even if it does it still has an outstanding comment. I sent shinx the file and they havent teuploaded yet. And besides if the light source is coming from where i think it is the whole top of the tail would be in light. This includes the base of the tail where theres a lot of shading 13:09, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I was waiting for another comment before I reuploaded, so that's why I didnt upload immediately after getting the file. 15:07, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Fair enough, Shinx. CBA?

Sorry for breaking your CBA, but I don't really think the texture matches. It seems thicker than on the kit. 22:43 Wed Dec 9

I think it matches just fine. The kit blanks are so small and this is a bigger blank for an adult cat, and tbh the texture won't match 100% 22:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

By "thicker" do you mean thicker lines or just more texture...? I'm confused 23:52, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine, and Winter is correct. The blank is much bigger than the kit... so I'm going to re-CBA this.

Actually, the texture seems to be over smudged and overly thick compared to the kit. It doesn't match. 11:28, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Didn't we just address that above? Of course it's going to look thicker- it's a larger blank, and you can't show thicker texture on a kit blank. It'll just look like stripes. The style itself matches fine, but you're probably not going to get anything thinner than this?

It said it was oversmudged, and I do stand that thinning it out wouldn't hurt the image. The texture seems to be much more delicate and thin on the kit, so what if the kit blank is smaller? The texture still can be thinned out here. It looks too thick and the style doesn't match- the kit seems to be less smudged, like I said before. 10:14, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shivering Rose (Ki) ~ For Evaluation
First charart!! I made this in FireAlpaca. Comments? 21:11, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define highlights ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:31, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  21:37, December 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define nosepink because I can barely see it. Nice! 05:56, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

On a black cat, the nose "pink" is supposed to be black.

Lighten her up a bit; she looks almost pure black on my screen, which makes things seem lighter. Great job, especiall for a first. 06:17, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and smoothen the leg shading.

re-ups  23:40, December 7, 2015 (UTC)

She still needs to be lightened up, I can't make out the outline. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:59, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

As I've said before, seeing all of the lineart is not mandatory. As I can make out the lineart in places, I think it's fine. Could you define the light on the tail, though?

re-ups 00:19, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

The nosepink is still red. Change it to dark gray, please :-) 00:23 Wed Dec 9

Smooth the highlights a bit, they look hard-edged. I know, doing most anything with these blanks is a pain >.< 00:51, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 00:10, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

smoothen out the highlights 16:00, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you tell me how to do that? I'm not sure what that means ^^; 23:20, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps try running the blue tool over the highlight layer a couple of times? 06:20, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 23:47, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Rainfur (TC) (Star) - CBA
Tried some tinted shading, however if someone could give me advice on textures - the other chararts have them. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  22:04, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not very good at texture, so I can't really help you with that, but could you blur or smudge the shading more? 23:21 Tue Dec 8

Nice. Define the light in our right eye. 00:17, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading.

There's waste by her paws, and correct me if I'm mistaken, but shouldn't the shading on <-- leg be on the other side based on your light source? Very nice. 00:48, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading and I think there are some blurred lineart parts. Also can you add some depth to the eye? 06:06, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of shading leaking on her chin (sorry about being picky), and she needs more speckles. Nice! 08:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest turning your shading laer to multiply. You don't have to, but just thought Id suggest it. Would you like the file? 11:03, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Thanks for all the feedback! It's a nice welcome back! I've tried to complete all of the improvements tell me if I've missed anything. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  17:58, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading issues. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  18:02, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more 19:14, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and define the shading depth. 19:50 Wed Dec 9

REUPLOADED - Shading. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:51, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the shading could bee smoothed out or smudged more, depending on what you did.

Try lightening the opacity. 00:23, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be a really dark tail-tip like that? 01:10, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I still think she needs more speckles, perhaps check the warrior/queen image for some reference? 11:55, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading should be smoothed out and lightened. Then brightened and applied more speckles. Also, I've made the texture more apparent. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:13, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on <== that front paw? 22:17, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out and lighten it on the head. 11:30, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Shading should be better. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:58, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading on --> this ear? The earpink color kinda disappears in the shading. 02:34 Sun Dec 13

Maybe expand the shading a little on the tail? Lovely. :)  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  06:37, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

REUPLOADED - Woop, woop! — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:27, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source on the tail and I think this is ready for a CBA. Nice work!

REUPLOADED - Thanks! — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:20, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Littlekit (Ki) - CBA
tiny baby

Re-uploaded. Was asked to do some things.

I asked you to define the shading and it llooks good. Can you maybe just smooth out the shading in general? What I mean is like blur it some more, but I know you don't blur so like just making it more smoother.

Re-uploaded. I have too many shading layers. =/

* Facepalm* Sorry for messing it up over here, i always manage to do that XD 04:28, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out on the main body. 11:29, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Perhaps add some shading to <== this ear?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  06:38, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA?

She is adorable, the hylights are a bit to white try setting them to overlay Belllastar (talk) 22:45, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

...I don't have highlights. I don't even see what you're talking about. She's supposed to be pale, and that's what I did.

her chest and her right (not ours) leg are a bit white Belllastar (talk) 23:15, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see how, as I am not using highlights on this image. I never use highlights, save for my black cats.

I think they're fine. 00:18, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

There are no highlights and I see nothing wrong with this image. Continuing CBA. 04:23, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (K) - For Approval
05:05, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I fixed the duplicate images for you! Can you blur the shading on the legs and chest a little bit? Super cute! 05:37, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are slightly thicker on his ES^^

The ES has texture, I think, so this should as well. 01:15, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading depth? Cutee! 02:46 Fri Dec 11

Reups Thanks <3! Also, ty Ivystripe, i didn't even know this went through cause my computer wasn't registering it, i tried to post it twice so that explains the duplication. x3 04:27, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on her neck and body and define it on the tail. 11:20, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on ==> this leg.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  06:39, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does he look green?

Blossom (ES) ~ For Approval
I seriously love this pattern.

Her eyes look like they're looking different directions. It might just be me, though. If you think they're fine, feel free to disregard. 01:07 Tue Dec 15

Re-uploaded Better?

Firestar (L. Alt) - For Approval
This is fugly ._.


 * There isn't texture, its shading


 * Done with no layers


 * Colors from file. 06:48, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

the depth needs defining and it needs to be smoothed out a lot. 11:06, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Shading needs to be defined (I don't know if that's what Trolly meant but I'm saying it just in case). I can't see it at all. 11:11, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:34, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

It could stand to be defined a little more, it kinda passes for a texture. 20:13 Mon Dec 14

Re-uploaded 00:14, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Storm Pelt (ES) ~ For Approval
oh god I hate this. Anyways. Comments? 09:27, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back legs. This is nice!

Re-uploaded Thanks. 01:25, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blend the scars a tiny bit more with the pelt? It kinda stands out awkwardly 01:34, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:35, December 15, 2015 (UTC) 

What about his tail? Shouldn't it be more... bushy? S i l <font color="#71b9e9">v <font color="#61bde5">e <font color="#52c1e1">r <font color="#54c7df">t <font color="#55cddd">w <font color="#57d2da">i <font color="#58d8d8">g  08:47, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

thats for notable instances only, which his isnt. 08:50, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Only if it's mentioned numerous times like Poppydawn. 09:16, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Pine Needle (ES) ~ For Approval
mew 22:41, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Nice 0: Add a bit of light to the eyes? 01:48, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups pesky shading layer went over the eyes - and thank you! 16:55, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Fircone (ES) - For Approval
<font color="#9facf4">S <font color="#90b0f0">i <font color="#80b4ec">l <font color="#71b9e9">v <font color="#61bde5">e <font color="#52c1e1">r <font color="#54c7df">t <font color="#55cddd">w <font color="#57d2da">i <font color="#58d8d8">g  07:28, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

You have to reserve this on the main page before you post. However, since this is your first time, I'll reserve it for you. But please remember to reserve before you post images. This is nice!

Also, I'll promote you into an apprentice. You seem to have excellent knowledge of chararts.

As for the image, could you lighten the shading a few ticks ==> here? This is stunning *.*

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Mothflight (Queen) - For Approval
I am horribal at shading, but i'll fix it later Belllastar (talk) 16:19, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

You didnt reserve this. Also proper file naming and spelling are part of the rules. Please follow them. If you do get to keep this image, define shading depth and your light source. And don't align your images. 16:30, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Umm.. your not a senoir warrior, I tryed to spell it right but I make mistakes. I'm kind of new to the project (I already said the shadings bad i might redo it) (I unalign it) Belllastar (talk) 22:36, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

You forgot a date on the reservation. Again, if you do get to keep it I don't think the eye colour matches. Either that or lighten the shading and/or the green 00:12, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I know I'm not, but you need to follow the rules, Bella. Please use proper spelling and grammar. Just because you're new to the project is not an excuse to misspell words. You can use spellcheck. This file needs to be renamed File:Mothflight.queen.png 00:22, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I renamed the file for you. Please remember to use proper grammar and follow the rules. 01:48, December 16, 2015 (UTC)\

I'm sorry if I was a little rude, I was just really just tired (the eyes are color picked from her warrior image, and I don't use shading.) Belllastar (talk) 03:59, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

If you don't use shading then how are you shading your image? Whatever it is, it should be smoothed out and defined. <span style="">04:08 Wed Dec 16

It doesn't match the rest of the her images though. I think you should colour pick from something which has larger eyes (say, the ES or her StarClan image). 04:29, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Fox (DTC) (ES) - For Approval
it's been a while since I've posted something here — <font color= black face="Calibri,sans-serif">b  <font color= black face="Calibri,sans-serif">eau  <font color= #002e63 face="Calibri,sans-serif">Finders <font color= #002e63 face="Calibri,sans-serif"> Keepers 03:51 Wed Dec 16

Blur the texture a bit. 04:16, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded — <font color= black face="Calibri,sans-serif">b  <font color= black face="Calibri,sans-serif">eau  <font color= #002e63 face="Calibri,sans-serif">Finders <font color= #002e63 face="Calibri,sans-serif"> Keepers 04:47 Wed Dec 16

If the light source is coming from somewhere by the top left corner shouldn't the whole chest be in shadow, or is that just me? Nice, by the way 04:59, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Fox is a little more.... Red? 06:28, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

On his description, though, it states he is a 'large brown tom.' 08:22, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think the rogue came first so shouldn't his tone match that? 10:19, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (Star) ~ For Approval
10:07, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Flip the direction of your head shading or your leg shading around- the light source doesn't match. 10:16, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

i'm trying to get it looking like it's coming from above, it won't if I do that. i'm still tinkering. 10:18, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe move the head shading to be more on the chin? <span style="">16:25 Wed Dec 16

reuploaded altered the shading some more and fixed up the stripes 16:45, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reed Tail (Mc)- For Approval
15:10, December 16, 2015 (UTC)