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Littlecloud(mc alt 2) ~ for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​​​​​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to the alt mentioned above by Echo, this would have to be renamed File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. Mind fixing that real quick Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^

17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The darker stripes on the face should be thinner, and all of the stripes should be more jagged^^ There's also a slight layer of texture going underneath them, on the mca ~

Define your light source. Its pretty hard to distinguish it. If you need help with it, you may find the Apprentice Tutorials helpful. 16:43 Sun Dec 30

Still working? 00:05, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

If you are still working, there's this area outside the right hind leg that shouldn't be filled in. I'll send you a screenshot later when I have time to get on the computer.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:26, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go!Potato Flakin (talk) 04:24, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, sorry for the break, I just had thingd going on, and life, but I got it up! : )Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:57, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, that shading tho! I dont know what I was doing, but I fixed the shadingIm Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yes, much better. There are some things that still need to be addressed, but take your time. The stripes need to be smudged and sharpened a bit more. I would recommend you take the colors of his apprentice, or medicine cat apprentice. The earpink is much lighter on the other images, and the two stripes on the face are blotchy. Seperate them so they are two stripes, then smooth and sharpen them to match the kit. Whiten the white, and define the shading (have you tried tinting your shading? It's magic) This is very good Owlbite, you are doing well.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I sort-of like it.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite! Whiten the white on the legs, thin out the face stripes, and define the shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:12, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, face stripes cant get any thiner. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:26, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I understand. Where's your lightsouce here? If there is one please define it. Potato Flakin (talk) 04:29, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading too? I can't tell where the light source is either, but I think that may just be because I can't make out where a lot of the shading is. 13:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC) I will definitely the light, but look at the light in the eyes.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 16:38, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't have white markings or pale around the earpink^

Lighten the earpink a little more, and remember, don't stress, the lightsource and other things are and easy fix, take your time.=)Potato Flakin (talk) 01:36, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

spooky, look at the offical art, look, there is white marks. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:59, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I cut the white down, but it is there on the offical art, and if I define the shading, it will make it look... just... bad. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:06, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I’m quite sure it’s supposed to be that pale color around the ears. I matched the same image you’re matching to when I did the other images in this alt set

Re-up, okay.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 03:03, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Owlbite, don't kill me, but I'm still very confused about your lightsource. I cannot see where the shading is.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:30, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that help? I removed some shading from the direct place of the light sorce, wich needed to be fixed anyways.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:00, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the shading darker? i think it'll make it more visible. that pattern is looking good 11:44, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, yeet.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:41, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png not Littlecoud -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:38, 1/09/2019 ]

Actually, it's not fully wrong. There's just a duplicate of File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png that's spelled wrong. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:40, 1/09/2019 ]

Define shading every but the paws. Define light on the paws. It's coming along! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:55, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, sorry about my splng!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:56, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry if it's a bother, but the paws' light could still be defined greatly. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 23:00, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I tryed, let me know if it needs more.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:10, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a lot of depth to the shading. I cannot see it. Also the leg stripes seem to be ending abruptly..?Potato Flakin (talk) 23:19, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that is as dark as it will get, if you need me to do it more, msg me on discord, okay? because I need to talk to you, and get your help(and you cant do that here).<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:39, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the stripe at the top of the tail tip; it should be thicker to match the mca, and also even out the coloring and amount of the stripes on the front legs; there should be at least 5 on the < front leg, and 4 on the > front one

Re-up, the count seems a little... over of a responce, but I did it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:50, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light everywhere. You may find the apprentice tutorials helpful.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:16, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes a LOT. The leg stripes especially are unintelligible from everything else. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:28, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

The base color on the back leg nearest to us has white on the edges, the ear pink could be a little more defined. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:37, 1/10/2019 ]

Realized it is in the mca, sorry. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:38, 1/10/2019 ]

There's some waste outside this ear.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:52, January 11, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm.. also what color are the berries? One screen tells me they're white but another screen tells me it's light green.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:05, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

cant work, im away from my drawing tablet, but the berries, I thought they were leaves, and they had little white flowers on them, I looked it up for refrence then first making it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:50, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

catmint and borage were the plants<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:55, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Creative idea Owlbite! But since I'm confused about the color of the berries, I think they should be one color.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:38, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Pose is from a reference, I can show it if need be. <span style="">20:10 Wed Jan 2

Sun these are absolutely astounding! Could you add either a tag or bell to the collar? There’s usually one. :) 20:16, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

Soooo cute! Can you move the collar a little bit down the neck? It kinda looks like it's choking them right now.. ^^' Also, the forearm closest to us looks overly thick. 23:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

woah!! love everyhting on this charart, i cant wait to see the next one. Starclanwilldarkme2 (talk) 00:16, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing, Sun! Could you possibly make that <-- front leg a bit longer to match the length of the other? It seems a bit shorter. 03:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the lineart on the hind paws just a bit? 03:56, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

The front paw facing us feels a bit too chubby compared to the rest of the legs. Also, while I do understand what you're going for with the lil fatty fluff on the haunch to define the tummy, it looks a bit off. Plump cats don't really have their fat protruding past their haunch, and with them laying down like this, the fat would go lower to touch the ground bc of gravity. These are super cute ;; I adore the toe beans so so much!! —​

Could be my personal preferences, but could you make the long haired's fur less.. spiky and give it more variation?

Hi Sun! You don’t have a limit like other art and take the time you need, but I just wanted to confirm that you’re still working? :) 17:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I am! I'm just trying to enjoy my last week of break before the semester! I'll upload soon! <span style="">18:46 Tue Jan 8

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I love it! If it dosent get aproved here, my wiki, Complete Warriors Wiki needs some. :) -Texaswild

Tribe of Endless Hunting Blanks - CBA
Alrighty, I'm all freshened up and ready for these. ^^ 21:53, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Do you think you can enlarge it? 21:54, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, I forgot to mention I was planning on doing that. ^^' 21:56, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups How's this size wise? 03:25, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Great! Do you think you could add a mouth? 04:44, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you possibly make the fur taper out a little bit more on the long haired blank, specifically talking about the 3 hairs on the cheeks. Also idk if its just me, but I feel like the front leg in the back is visibly thinner than the front front leg 05:09, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

I love these. Can you give the short-hair a cheek, since the long-hair already has one? :D 18:34, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 20:03, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Back at it again with some redlines for you-- —​​

Reups Thanks! Much appreciated. 02:35, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Push the neck forward a bit. Right now the cat would be straining its neck very hard. Also shrink the length of the leg on the ground, it's too big.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:07, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the neck is fine. It doesn't look like the cat is straining since it's just looking up. 15:29, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

The short-haired far front leg looks a bit too chubby at the bottom. try making the paw angle more.. sharp?

15:32, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

The neck is fine. My own cats have strained their neck far worse than this LOL —

Reups 21:31, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

They are really coming along! The short-hair's chest looks a bit pointy. xD 03:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reups lol 17:45, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

can you maybe add some fluff to the neck? also the front leg thats furtherest away from us looks a bit too thick. (it's especially prominent on the shorthair.) love how they're looking like they're about to jump at a fly tho LUL 18:34, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm maybe do the same thing you’d done to the shorthaired’s chest to the long one in terms of general shape - it seems a little more pointy/angled than the other. I also think the shorthaired haunch is a little big, it hits the same points the long one does, but it shouldn’t go as far because the long one has fur making it go out further

Reups Like this? 03:33, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

The leg and the chest should be connected on the longhair. —​

while theres a comment here ill just point out that theres a white spot between the legs that on the short hair blank should be transparent. love these blanks, btw 11:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

or i guess looking at it, it might be the back leg. jsut thought id point it out– if its intentional ignore my previous comment 11:58, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

The foreleg furthest from us looks.. odd. Im no anatomy expert but it seems too.. thick and straight. I don't know if that made sense but eh. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:26, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Yeah, I'm honestly not sure what to do with that leg. I'm on the struggle bus with that one I'm afraid. And, Burntclaw, yeah I was kinda thinking that would be part of the hind leg. 01:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

https://prnt.sc/m4p2jm I tried to redline, but I'm no anatomy expert so if someone else can do better please do. :') <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:40, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Don't kill me but the longhair looks slightly taller than the shorthair? -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 11:09, 1/09/2019 ]

I feel that has more to do with the long-haired blank's dimensions and whatnot. They look the same size to me. ​​​​​

Reups Yeah, Jayce is right. I made sure they're both the same size, but the floofy tail on the long-haired adds more height. 18:30, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

dont think that tail is able to cover up the entire leg that sits behind it for both long hair and short hair– just eyeballing the size of the cat's front paws and im p sure there should be some leg showing. then again i acknowledge that it'll look strange if that leg is visible, so you might wanna adjust the position of the tail. 13:47, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm the top half of that most visible front leg seems a little thick on both, could you thin it a few pixels?

Reups How's this? 22:02, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 22:56, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

i hate to break the CBA, but the leg the tail used to be hiding (lol) is visibly just a little too short. judging from other images of cats sitting down, the leg showing should approx. be as long as the other legs. im terrible at explaining 13:45, January 11, 2019 (UTC)

I also think you should add more fur lines (or however you say it) to the tail so that it's more consistent with the other blanks. On the short hair, the tail's thickening in the middle somewhat bothers me. Could you thin it out a little?

Reups more floof 21:24, January 11, 2019 (UTC)

Let's try this again. CBA? ​​

Sorry, Vec, but can you soften the long hair's chest tufts? It seems to go in different directions. 02:16, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

could you also make the tail on the short haired blank more uniform? 04:31, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups It's no problem! 05:36, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 06:06, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think that on the long haired one, the fur on the leg seems a bit messy. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

It looks floofy and good to me.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:07, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, it flows just fine. —

Squirrelflight (A Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I know the shading on the haunch needs fixed so please don't comment on it. 14:19, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

White looks a little cream.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:37, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. Well, the official image does have it kinda cream, not really white, though it could be lightened a tad it'd still be cream. Also think you could recede it on the tail a tiny bit, doesn't seem to go as far down what it's supposed to match

I'd rather not change the colors as they were colorpicked directly off the image. Yeah, i thought there was too much on the tail, ill fix that as soon as I can. 00:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the shading depth/expand the shading on the shoulder and back? 03:26, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out all of the shading? I know you said not to comment on certain aspects, but I feel the entire image could use some smoothing out, in addition to Vec's comment. ​​​​​

can you blend the tail bit in more?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:19, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

What do you mean blend it a bit more? 10:48, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe Owlbite meant about blurring the shading on the tail. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 12:10, 1/09/2019 ]

I think Owlbite meant for Mink to smudge the cream tail-tip into the pelt, but it looks smudged enough to me. Silver may be right too.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:11, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

no, I ment to make more of a transition from the brown to the white. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:14, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

It transitions just fine. It even matchea the image so I don't see what the issue there is? 12:43, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Keep in mind it's been 4 days since the last comment. Are you still working?

Yeah, I'm going to upload in a bit. I couldn't work on it the past few days because of my migraines. If I don't do it today, I have until the 14th.. 12:58, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt App 2) - For Approval
It's.... interesting, to say the least. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:59, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink? —​​​​​

A good effort, Dark! However, on the picture, i'm picking up small hints of white around the hindlegs, so there's likely a bit of white along the belly, she should have more stripes, the pale should be softer, there isn't any earpink at all as far as I can tell, and she has some brown in her pelt. If the brown is there, sharpen/define it because it sho7uld be fairly visible. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:18, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

A lot of earpink is leaking onto the head, I can't see any earpink in <-- this ear, and the stripes need to be sharpened. And her back looks blue..?Potato Flakin (talk) 01:32, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

In addition to adding more stripes like Squid said, I think extending the ones on the haunch all the way would help it match better. 01:40, January 9, 2019 (UTC)\

can you blur/smudge the stripes?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:12, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Pretty sure this needs to be short-furred, as that's how it is in the image. 02:35, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Some golden needs to be added to as you can clearly see it on the official image. The stripes should also be thinner and add some more. There doesn't seem to be a dorsal stripe either. This is really good though! Also could you possibly lessen the the chest white, there seems to be less on the image. 10:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Before I do anything, should I blur or sharpen the stripes? There seems to be conflicting critiques on that. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:17, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I think they're better off being softened. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:19, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

i think what they meant is to soften the stripes by blurring them or smudging them, but extending the stripes so they come to points at the ends. not exactly sure though. 18:53, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

They should be extended and softened, I don't see why they would need to be sharpened, unless it's what Ari said, but the stripes on the TUG image don't really appear to come to any points. Nice job so far! 21:29, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Apprentice Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I'm absolutely proud :) All colours from the alt star. Comments? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

You should be proud! Define the shading on the tail and paws? 18:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC) Smooth shading a little on the shoulder back and haunch, add some to the forelegs and hindlegs farthest from us and soften the stripes, maybe add a handful more if you're able. This is very good! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:47, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the stripes some too? 18:51, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Screams bc I keep forgetting to mention things. Sharpen the gold on the shoulder and foreleg a little, and there's waste between the whiskers. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Is it better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

<-- this hind leg needs more white, there's a lot on the warrior alt. Also friendly reminder to upload under File:Feathertail.apprentice.alt2.png. It was misspelled earlier (it's fixed now)Potato Flakin (talk) 23:15, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm and the stripe placement would end up matching the warrior, as would everything else to it, since the warrior's the first in the set. Would you mind adding some white/very pale gray hairs up into the earpink, to match the set? I also think there'd be more, but thinner, stripes on the tail. You're doing excellent with this, by the way

Could you define/add some more stripes on the front paw furthest from us and the back paw furthest from us? And add some cream to the hind paw furthest from us too. 03:25, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Nice image overall. I'll promote you into an apprentice.

Reups <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Could you maybe blur the white a little bit on her right front paw? -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:42, 1/10/2019 ]

Sure, I'll do it when I'll come home :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Reups :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Could you define the shading overall, especially on the gray? 22:03, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I do think there'd need to be more visible pale parts on the belly and haunch, alt. warrior seems to have them, and that's first in set

Reups any better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Also I'm not going to be able to work on it till tomorrow morning (UTC time) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

The shading seems blotchy, for a lack of a better word. It seems to be darker in places and non-existent where it should be (for example the legs). It's also overblurred in places.

Reupsss <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Can you darken the shading on the forelegs please. 13:00, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the inside hind leg. Your doing great! ^^ 13:57, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Can you define the shading depth on all the legs? I think the stripes on the face need to be connected to the eyes too. Might be my eyes, but there appears to be leaky shading on the back. On the hind leg closest to us, maybe move the white so it's against the line art of the haunch? it looks a little off in the middle like it is. It also appears less soft on the warrior. You've done a great job on this so far!! 21:23, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt A 2) - For Approval
First charart since my switch from sai to FireAlpaca! I think it turned out well. Colors all taken from the queen file. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 23:57, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you smoothen out the shading?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:02, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

So for the most part, the shading does not need smoothing and will not be smoothed. i smoothed the top of the haunch as that was suggested, aswell as defined light on the farthest hindleg. Sorry Owl, but the shading doesn't really need smoothing unless somebody agrees. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:15, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I agree with Squid. Dark shading doesn't always need smoothing. The shading on the tail is a little lighter that the shading elsewhere, and smooth out the earpink in --> this ear.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:37, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oh, there's some waste here and here .Potato Flakin (talk) 02:28, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I actually think the shading on the lower haunch area and base of the tail could be smoothed out just a bit. And I think the shading is leaking on booty. Hey, I use FireAlpaca too! You did pretty well for your first time! 03:23, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

i agree that the shading should be smoothed– especially on the haunch. 10:59, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I can't reups for a bit bc I'm not at home right now but I'm only going to smooth haunch and base of the tail. Also see how the earpink looks smoothed like Potato asked. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 13:03, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading needs to be lightened/smoothed on the stomach and chest as well. Also, I think your comment towards Owl was unnecessarily harsh. You could've simply asked for a second opinion instead of insisting that "it will not be smoothed."

I apologise for so. I try to be nice most times, but I can be harsh and rude without realizing it. If you think k so, then I'll try to smooth it there too once I'm home. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 13:11, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm if you could define the light on the legs and on the < side of the visible shoulder as well, imthat’s be great. Do love the tint on this

reups idk if i smoothed enough or anything but im just gonna put it here for now and worry abt it later, idk im still getting used to this <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:55, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the tail and haunch is a different hue from the rest of the shading. Could you colour match? —​​

Lighten the shading overall.

The shading could definitely still be smoothed out a bit more. ​​

Back and tail waste is still there.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:50, January 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reups FireAlpaca I mainly got to do animation but after this, I think I prefer sai still for general art, so I redid this completely using sai and i'm switching back to sai as my main for pretty much everything. I can't kick it even when i try to ;3; <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:39, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Violetshine (Alt K) ~ For Approval
Rip kit blanks, I actually liked them a little. (Yes, I do know the kit blanks are being redone but if this doesn't get approved during the voting duration i'll reserve it afterwards.) -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 00:08, 1/13/2019 ]

Lower the opacity of the texture a bit. *hugs kit Violetshine *Potato Flakin (talk) 00:24, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reups I would want to hug her too. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~    [ 00:26, 1/13/2019 ]