Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Thornclaw (A) ~ Declined
Redone because of shading and stripes and everything. Last OA was me. Comments? 04:56, 28, 08, 2013

He be a sexy apprentice too! Darken the shading a bit more and define it on the head 04:59, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Scarly. 8DD 05:11, 28, 08, 2013

Define the shading on the upper part of the tail, perhaps?

Still working, wifey? 04:16, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, Jenrock. ;_; I gotta decline this.

Millie (Lo) - Redone
Last OA was Scar, redone for not matching among other reasons. Comments? Changes might not be showing. 23:35 Fri Sep 6

Define the eye depth? It looks like there's no color at all. This is amazing! 00:17, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Define just the tail shading? I really do like this. .o.

Re-uploaded. 00:53 Sat Sep 7

The collar lineart looks kind of ragged. Try smoothing it out by adding a pixil or two along a few edges and it will help  20:35, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt Ki) - Redone
Redone for multiple reasons OA is me. 18:33, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes look a tad bit more like just pixels... maybe have the blur settings really low and try bluring them just a smidge?

Swoop (CG) ~ Redone
OAs include Iceheart and Scarly. Changes are not showing. Comments?

Wooo~ She's sexy. Define the mudstreaks 00:13, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Hawkheart (MC) ~ Redone
redone so he's grey and brown yo changes are here 23:16, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Willowkit (CP) ~ Tweaked
this is actually tweaked rather than redone let's see how this goes changes are here 23:16, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Cinderheart (W) - Redone
Redone to be a smoke. Comments? 3:41 Sun Sep 8 2013

Changes are here. 3:42 Sun Sep 8 2013

The color seems a bit more suited for a dark gray cat in my opinion, and since her shade is not specified as being dark, is it possible you could lighten the base some? 06:11, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Wow, Breezy, this is fabulous. I am very impressed, but make the eyes more of a blue color, please. 13:09, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Stretch the ear-pink a bit more and define the light on the tail. :o holy crap, Breezy mine now... 14:40, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oh my God, I'm sorry guys, I didn't realize that's what you meant. I mixed up the words in the paragraph and didn't realize that she wasn't dark. I think this is better? But I do know her eyes are dark and they're staying. 16:15 Sun Sep 8 2013

It never says she's a gray and cream smoke, but for the eyes make them more blue but keep them dark, please. If you don't mind. 00:41, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Where's the cream? And they are blue. Very dark, but they are blue. 1:09 Mon Sep 9 2013

They look a tad purple, unless that's my monitor... And I'll probably get shot for this and you don't have to do it if you really don't want to, but perhaps lighten her no more than maybe two shades? If you'd rather not, that's fine with me. My eyes could be going, but it does seem like she's tilting close to black...

Crowfeather (Lo) - Redone
Redone to be smoke. Comments? Changes are here 04:05 Sun Sep 8

Think you could blur the shading a bit? 16:17 Sun Sep 8 2013

Bramblestar (D) ~ Redome
OA be Loonie and Icy, redone to match his other images. I mainly took the colors from the kit and the stripes from the leader, as well as added his shoulder scar. Comments? Changes may not be showing, so look here if they aren't. 04:18, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

The base coat color seems to be lighter in the leader image. I'm sure if you asked, you could get the hex codes for the colors used 06:13, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

The colors are from the kit image, actually, which was made first o3o 13:25, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes on the neck, shoulder, and back are getting lost in the shading 14:17, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

I think they're fine, however if anyone disagrees I'll lighten the shading. 14:58, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

I have to agree with Scar on this one. They do get lost in the shading. As for the colors, everything /should/ match each other, since I color picked from the kit... it just might be because the kit blanks are smaller so the shading'll make everything darker, while on the leader, there's more room for light.

Re-up. 16:32, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Dovewing (W) ~ Redone
Needed to be a smoke; too lazy to name the OAs c: Lookey here for changes. 15:22, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Possibly define where you added the smoke to her fur, I cannot even see it right now. 17:04, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

How would I? I thought it was just gray with a tinge of brown. You mean define the brown? 19:59, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

No smoke is where the first part of the hair is light colored and the rest is he pelt color, it's mostly visible around the neck, chest, and tail. It'd be kinda like Darkstar (SC). Basically what Breezey said on the talk page. 20:13, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reups -prepares to get shot- look here for changes. Would someone mind making a smoky tutorial on the tut page? 20:53, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Define the smoke and enlarge it. 00:40, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (A) ~ Redone
Redone to be smoky, most recent OA be me. Changes aren't shwoing yet. 17:03, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the smoke? 19:26 Sun Sep 8 2013

Cinderpelt (StC) ~ Redone
Redone to be smoky. Since she's dark gray, I darkened her base a touch, and I messed around with shading a little more. Comments? 19:35, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Blackclaw (W) ~ Redone
Most recent OA is me and wow this is really bad. Changes be here.

Larksong (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA is me and I fiddled around with the shading like I did on the elder so she was less gray and gave her raggedness and also fixed those eyes. Changes are here.