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Squirrelflight (D) - For Approval
I'd also like advice for this. 23:51, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Make her tail bigger and fluffier. Can't tell the difference between it and the regular tails rn. This looks really nice though, tbh. 23:54 Sat Jun 25

Re-uploaded: Thanks berry! 04:28, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a tad bit more and make the tail fur a tad longer close to the tip, maybe? I can redline the lines if you need.  07:45 Sun Jun 26 

Re-uploaded: 18:45, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the color a little too dull compared to the other images? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:08, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the tail, and give it a bit more 'fluff', to put it that way? 05:37 Mon Jun 27

Re-uploaded: 19:41, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

You should make the tail have more stripes. 01:50, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Erm, there are several of them and I made them match the older deputy. I'd like another opinion on that. 14:34, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

the tip of her tail should be coloured in at least. (I think) 21:12, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think you need more tail stripes, just thicken a couple of them toward the middle so they don't look quite as uniform 04:14, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Sorry I can't really get tail stripes right. 15:30, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

You definitely don't need anymore tail stripes. I think you should just thicken the ones you have.

Re-uploaded: 22:01, July 5, 2016 (UTC)

If you're still looking for advice on the tail, I'd say to just replicate Redtail's tail. I could help with a redline if you need one, if you should decide to do something more with the tail. 18:49, 07/6/2016

Can I ask what's wrong with it now? I think it looks okay. 23:11, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

The overall shape is fine, but it looks too cylindrical, like she had it trimmed (like. think pomeranian with a haircut). It just needs more fur tufts, like redtail's does, is all. 23:31, 07/6/2016

Her tail stripes on her other images seem to have some pattern rather than just being straight stripes. (at least according to the warrior and apprentice)n

Re-uploaded: Ferk I tried to follow your redline but I don't know if it turned out fine. Please don't blame me, I'm tired and I didn't try my best although I should've. Does anyone want me to redo the tail? 02:49, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Bluestar (D) - For Approval
Had trouble with the eyes, I'll redo them in the next upload, be nice if I did something wrong. --Gardenglaze 02:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

ear should be ripped. 02:30, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please reupload under File:Bluestar.deputy.png? Your original file has two .png's, so I renamed it, but please upload under this file name. 03:00, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure velvetmoon has already got this reserved. 03:20, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I should quit this and let velvetmoon take over? --Gardenglaze 04:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I apologise if this offends anyone. But I do have both Bluestar and Oakheart reserved. I will be posting the images soon. 15:05, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Upload thought I would just upload on this. 20:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading. 21:19, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe give it a little more depth towards the base of the tail? Some volume, so to speak? 22:49 Mon Jun 27

crop this to the lineart. 21:11, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make sure it consistently fills the area 04:13, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Got it to look better with smudged shading though I'm not 100% sure I like it. 12:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 12:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the butt please?  18:42 Wed Jun 29 

Reupload butt shading has been expanded! :) 10:21, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth out the head and tail shading a bit? 02:47 Fri Jul 1

Reupload 08:59, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more. 21:19, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smooth as I'm gonna get it! 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks really hard edged compared to all her other images. Are you sure you can't smooth it more, or maybe even lighten it? 01:43, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I thought shading was an artists choice. But I blurred it insted of smudged it so it matches. 05:54, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. Also, shading is artist's choice.

Reupload I smoothed it a lot more now I hate it but if smooth shading is what you want here you go! 09:45, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the image should be cropped... 16:16 Fri Jul 8

Um it is cropped. 17:41, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Oakheart (D) - For Approval
This time I used MS paint to do the eyes so they don't look like crap. --Gardenglaze 05:13, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I'm fairly sure Velvet holds the reservation on this one as well

I hope nobody has Stonefur reserved. --Gardenglaze 19:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

Where should I post mine? Should I just take over or wait for this to be archived. 16:20, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Upload I know I need to smooth out the shading will fix next upload. 20:10, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload fixed the shading a bit. 10:30, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on this image could be smoothed out a little as well. 21:20, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload it's not right... 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more.

Reupload 09:45, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Just wondering, is the file the right size? It looks a bit small in Oakheart's gallery. Or maybe it's just my eyes 20:11, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

It's not small, it's because they didn't crop it.

Reupload cropped! 09:24, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) - For Approval
I will fix the shoulder/neck shading in a few minutes. 18:25 Wed Jun 29

Is the tail tip supposed to have almost non-existent shading? If it is, ignore me; I'm known for asking dumb questions and having bad eyesight. =P

Define the shading on the legs, and define the earpink. I don't know if that's how it should be so ignore the last one if it is supposed to be like that --  14:50, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Not changing the ear pink. But I am redoing the shading because this looks horrible. 02:19 Sun Jul 3

Reuploaded 01:10 Mon Jul 4

I can't really tell where the light's coming from... The tail haunch and head says from the back, but the shoulders and back doesn't quite seem to match :-/ 03:58, July 4, 2016 (UTC)

I think it's the way it was smudged, since I tried to get it as smooth of a transition as possible. It is coming from the back. I'll try to make that a little more clear. 14:01 Thu Jul 7

Sunstar (D) - CBA
my sweet son 16:22, 06/30/2016

Smooth out the tail shading a bit. Seems kinda hard-edged compared to the rest of the body's shading.

Sorry I think the tail shading looks just fine. 01:40, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

And I disagree; I've been told to smooth out shading softer than this. a little bit wouldn't hurt.

reup 14:16, 07/7/2016

CBA?

Oakheart (Alt. D) - For Approval
I'm confused on which deputies I can do, but I'm pretty sure I can do this one? Comments? <span style="">13:36 Fri Jul 1

Define the shading. To clarify you can do any deputy image that is on the characters page and is not reserved. 11:13, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">12:10 Sat Jul 2

Swap the tail shading so that it makes sense with your light source.

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:15 Tue Jul 5

Smooth the tail shadig some and define the light on the lifted paw <span style="">20:33, 07/6/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">09:02 Thu Jul 7

CBA? \

Sorry, but the shading on the front leg should be defined, and it's also leaking.

Re-uploaded <span style="">12:34 Fri Jul 8

Brightwhisker (D) - CBA
I had fun making this one :3 Comments? <span style="">20:35 Fri Jul 1

Nice! Blur the shading a bit more. 21:24, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It's also leaking some on the underside of the belly. <span style="">22:41 Fri Jul 1

Sharpen the markings; it looks a little over blurred compared to the leader 23:01, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How do I sharpen the markings? <span style="">02:29 Sat Jul 2

Fix your light direction. Faced says > and tail says <. 22:49, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not sure if the light is correct now, but I switched the shading on the tail to the other side, if that was what you meant. <span style="">01:25 Sun Jul 3

The light should be fine now. The shading on her chest is leaking.

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:21 Tue Jul 5

CBA?

Sorry to break CBA, but the haunch shading could be expanded more, and the light on the raised paw could be defined so it doesn't look grey, and the ears need shading wit this light source. <span style="">20:37, 07/6/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">22:51 Wed Jul 6

Does Brightwhisker have any ear pink in this? If she does, you should lighten it, because it looks too unnoticeable. If she doesn't, add it, she has it in her leader image.

She does have earpink, but she has shading on the ears so its a bit hard to see. I don't want to get rid of the shading though, because I was just asked to add it. <span style="">08:40 Thu Jul 7

Re-CBA?

Russetfur (Alt. D) - CBA
I lightened her pallet a bit to better match her image in the manga. I'm gonna put her alt. warrior up for tweak nom. so it'll match better. 23:31, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Could you blur the belly shading a bit? nice nice nice :-) <span style="">21:20 Tue Jul 5

Re-uploaded 06:18, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

smooth the shading on the legs closest to us? <span style="">18:27, 07/6/2016

Re-uploaded 02:44, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Leopardstar (D Alt) - For Approval
Killed it. Killed it. Killed it.

define shading everywhere but the tail? <span style="">18:28, 07/6/2016

'Re-uploaded. I just redid the shading; much happier with it now.

Could you define the shading on the face please?  <span style="">20:27 Thu Jul 7 

Re-uploaded.

Hawkfrost (D) - CBA
23:55, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten up the white just a tiny bit? Looks kinda brown...

Re-uploaded. 18:48, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Petalfall (D) - For Approval
....can I get the file name fixed? Looks like the "L" key on my laptop was sticking. <span style="">01:59 Mon Jul 4

You can just reupload over File:Petalfall.deputy.png, honestly.

define the shading a lil more, and maybee smooth it out a little. this is gorgeous <span style="">20:38, 07/6/2016

Reedwhisker (D) ~ For Approval
17:45, July 5, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit.

Extend the shading on the neck down more so it connects to the shoulder shading, bc this light source calls for the neck to be shaded, and a shadow of the head to be cast on the back (example because words are tough) <span style="">20:41, 07/6/2016

Lionheart (D) ~ For Approval
Squigglestripe.  <span style="">11:03 Wed Jul 6 

Define the body shading.

Can you make the ruff a floofier at the back of the neck?

Actually, define shading everywhere? <span style="">21:00, 07/6/2016

reups  <span style="">16:22 Thu Jul 7 

Silvermask (D) ~ For Evaluation


Here's hoping this one gets approved ;) -- 21:01, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading? <span style="">1:06 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded --  01:27, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Could you tone down the earpink? It seems very neon atm. <span style="">01:41 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded -- 02:51 July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his face a little more noticeable? I know it's there, but I can barely see it. 07:57, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

should this guy even have an image? his page only says 'a dark tom', which could mean any colour. 09:40, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you lighten him. His previous image was grey and this looks black. 09:49, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Matching the previous image is not required. Also, I'm not sure if he should have the image either, tbh.

Because of his name, and the way his description is phrased, I think his stripe should be lighter than his base, personally. <span style="">15:41 Thu Jul 7

That's an assumption, though. It's fine being darker or lighter, and we don't make descriptions match what we think it could mean... it's fine as it is.

Re-Uploaded --  17:39, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink? Also on the topic of "should he even have an image", I think it's relevant to point out that Rubblepaw is also described as a dark tom and he doesn't get an image.  <span style="">20:26 Thu Jul 7 

Re-Uploaded (Shouldn't discussions go on PCA talk page like the should Silvermask have an image?) --  20:34, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

He looks black to me, I can't see anything on this image bar the ear pink. Also, the ear pink is a bit neon.

Re-Uploaded --  16:19, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Mudpuddle (D) - For Approval
I actually really like this. Since matching the previous image isn't mandatory, I totally did something else... wanted to redo his image anyways.

Define tail shading --  17:40, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Tigerstar (D) - For Approval
<span style="">14:13, 07/7/2016

Is it just me or does he have two nose bridge scars? It looks weird, you should fix it up.

What? There's nothing there.... <span style="">00:22, 07/8/2016

Okay, but the shading here looks weird. (the part with the red circle) Click me

thats texture <span style="">01:08, 07/8/2016

reuploaded un-weirded it <span style="">01:14, 07/8/2016

Stonefur (D) - For Approval
uugghhh... it's been a while since I did a blue-gray kitty 20:09, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and maybe expand it on the chest. 19:09, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D Alt2) ~ For Approval
Meh.  <span style="">23:38 Thu Jul 7 

Foxheart ~ For Approval
Any pattern tips would be appreciated.

It looks like the previous deputy image (which to my knowledge is also the first in the set), has a bit thinner and more... uh, what's the word I'm looking for? idk, but there seem to be more stripes on the other version than this one. It's hard for me to explain, but they seem more swirly and I'm so terrible at explaining these things. That seems to be a marble pattern, and heavy on the swirls, while this is less heavy.

Onestar (D) ~ For Approval
I hate him 14:02, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Where are his pupils?

Looks like they're on --> side of the eye, instead of <-- side.

I don't think pupils look like that. Besides, this is the only one whose "pupils" are facing right. It should be left.

theyre fine and the eyes on these are artists choice. :/ 17:20, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Cedarstar (D) ~ For Approval
Good leader 14:02, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Hailstar (D) ~ For Approval
Comments? 23:05, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Adderfang (D) ~ For Approval
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 23:10, July 8, 2016 (UTC)