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Petal (ES) ~ CBA
<3 09:16, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

there's waste between the two front legs 09:30 Tue Oct 20

Re-uploaded How come i haven't noticed? 10:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the hind leg closest to us. 13:04, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:07, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 01:33, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Fern Leaf (ES) ~ CBA
09:28, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

the back foot looks a lot smaller than it should be or is it just my eyes playing tricks on me 10:42 Tue Oct 20

reuploaded my bad 10:51, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 01:32, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Clear Sky (ES) ~ CBA
#screams# CLEAR SKY IS MY BAE

The shading is really dark on the bottom, could you lighten it some? 09:57, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere. 10:12, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Ferncloud has darker shading than this but oh well.

Lighten it a bit more. Please remember that the same shading darkness/style doesn't always work on every blank and pattern. 10:44 Tue Oct 20

re-ups Ferncloud was a lot darker than this. Just sayin

define the earpink on our left 17:50:10 October 20, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the earpink just fine 19:20, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

i agree it should be defined. such a thing as different monitor settings. 20:23, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Looking at the other images, the color is a bit too soft. Maybe sharpen it a little more to match the other images? --Dewsplash (talk) 01:59, October 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:59, October, 21, 2015

re-ups I did the earpink, but I think the color matches. It might be because I used highlights on him, or because of my shading. I tried to match the leader, but realized the leader's texture is different from the ancient and rogue. Should I match those instead?

The leader came first, so all images should match that.

In that case, I personally think this matches enough...

CBA? 01:33, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Quiet Rain (ES) - CBA
Hola. 10:11, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define/darken the tail shading.

Re-uploaded 11:55, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 01:33, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Violet Dawn (ES) ~ For Approval
God Berry's blanks are so beautiful ;; 11:57, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

theres a random streak of grey in the black of her hind paw, and could you maybe remove a tiny bit of the shadow on the front paw closest to us so the black is a bit more visible? 13:06, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

She doesnt have just black paws, she has blsck tipped paws so its fine the way it is. As for the shadow on the front paw, ill get to that when i get home 19:19, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

dude i know >.> all im saying is theres a random hard edged grey line that looks really out of place. christ. 20:02, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups 02:12, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There are random of light gray on her cheek. Add more shadow there? --Dewsplash (talk) 02:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:14, October, 21, 2015

Thats her cheekbone. Its fine 02:25, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Well, could you smooth it out a bit? It seems a bit too...abrupt, for lack of a better word. Also, lighten the shading on the belly a little bit and --> side of her.

reups 23:16, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

whoops reup 23:17, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front legs? 01:34, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Slate (ES) ~ For Approval
Probaby my favorite character from DotC. All colors from her other images. Comments? 13:28, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the texture more? It's much more blurred on her other ones 15:18, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:46, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the gradient of her eyes. They look multicoloured instead of amber. 04:33, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:23, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading a bit. she looks fierce :-) 02:56 Thu Oct 22

Reupload. I also lightened the shading to see if that helped. 03:13, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

There's a stray 1 px that isn't colored on the furthest back leg, I think ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:49, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload. 02:11, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Tom (ES) (ES) ~ CBA
My hand o.o Did this on and off between classes since about 8 this morning. I cannot believe how many layers of texture this thing needed, and it still looks awful lol. 15:16, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Woahh this is stunning. Could you lighten the shading on the belly a tad bit? 02:29 Wed Oct 21

reupped Thanks^^ I'm not sure if the changes showed up, but i lowered each layer by 5-15%, so that should do the trick... I think 23:25, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Gorgeous. CBA? 01:35, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (ES) - For Approval
I love Gray Wing I love Gray Wing I love Gray Wing. But I literally killed him with this. Thank you to Burnt for reserving this!!! Did I mention that I loved Gray Wing 16:04, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and possibly smudge the earpink more?

Re-uploaded: What even is this 21:23, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

could you darken the shading a little? 02:29 Wed Oct 21

reuploaded 11:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the far back leg? 15:20, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 20:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading 06:26, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you erase some of the shading on the tail? Beautiful~ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:30, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:48, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe it's my tired eyes, but I think there's some pesky shading waste hanging around the whole outline of the lineart. 21:14, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

it's there, i see it. blur the haunch shading a little more. 03:09 Fri Oct 23

Star Flower (ES) ~ For Approval
brb crying -- 16:09, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out/blur/whatever the stripes on her back. so beautiful. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 17:53, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on her head/face (if there is any). this is gorgeous! 20:05, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Did you get the file from me or TFG? If not, it's a good idea too - some of the areas are pale parts, rather than white. 20:46, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed areas of complaint (I hope, anyway). No, I did not get the file from anyone, but I mainly looked at Foxy's Loner and Queen, due to the similar poses. Looking at the legs, face, and tail on the Queen and Kit, they do seem to be a pale yellow. Would you like me to change that? -- 20:58, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

For your reference, the white + pale is at 100% on screen, with color #f9e7c3 for the pale. 21:11, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Oh no I wanted her DX oh well, would you like the file? 23:08, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed white parts to a cream color as needed, and also fiddled some with the shading. Thank you, Beebs!

I think I'm good now, Foxy, and I'm sorry I accidentally stole this from you. :( Thank you for the offer, though! -- 16:38, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

I wanted this too =P but you did a better job than I can ever. CBA?

Sorry, but the stripes could be thinned out, and the dorsal stripe could be thickened. I also think the stripes look slightly darker on her other images. 01:32, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth too? It looks a little flat ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:53, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Acorn Fur (ES) ~ For Approval
Colors from the kit. 20:50, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading 01:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Is that too light? 02:02, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on all the legs a bit? 19:27, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:24, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the facial shading? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:54, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Hawk Swoop (ES) ~ For Approval
IT'S THE CIRCLE OF LIIIIFE 21:10, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

AAAND IT MOVES US ALLLLL Can you define the tail shading? 21:19, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up 21:33, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a few ticks, especially on the stomach and --> of the lovely Hawk Swoop. All hail the Queen.

re-up 20:33, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the head shading? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:56, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (ES) ~ For Approval
23:54, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups just realized I forgot to smudge a few markings 23:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the markings some more please 00:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a tad? oh dang I want this but this is so beautiful 01:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reups Thanks Fox 09:58, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There should be thinner and a greater amount of stripes. I also think her patches are paler than this. 10:11, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

theyre not paler, theyre duller. 11:43, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

'reups I use highlights, that;'s why the color's brighter. I dulled them down a bit though. 15:35, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Can you shrink the amount of white from her belly. It doesnt go that far down on her other images 02:53, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Rainswept Flower (ES) - For Approval
yay pretty cat with the pretty name 01:20 Wed Oct 21

That name suits you, Splook ;) Can you define light on the tail (I know it's shorthaired) and I think her stripes can be more smudged (just a little bit) and maybe just slightly thicker?

also make the lighter brown brighter, its a bit dull compared to the other images. 11:44, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded why thank ya brambley ;) 23:50 Thu Oct 22

Holly (ES) ~ For Approval
I love this mademoiselle. 16:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Oops, a prickle wasn't filled in; I'll take care of that later. 16:05, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups there; I just realized that there's another unfilled pixel on her leg, which I'll fill on the next upload. 16:47, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I hope that's the last one and I added a few more prickles 21:11, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a little? 22:31, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reed Tail (ES) ~ For Approval
Ezüstkém ^^  I know shading looks bad,i will redo it next upload 20:07, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 12:21, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

One Eye (ES) - For Approval
Oh god, why did I make his pattern so ungodly hard, and why didn't I have separate layers for everything the first time? O.O I tried. I'll probably tweak the shading and bald patches on the next update. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:25, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge/whatever your prefrence the  little mark thingies above his head eyebrows a tad. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:33, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the bald patches blend in with the fur more? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:28, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Doestar (Star) ~ For Approval
I hope posting this follows the guidelines for PCA. This time I did Doestar, and I'm much happier with her. I tried to match the pattern of the leader version. I can't get that white to look right so if someone can help me with that, I'll be grateful ^^;. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 05:22, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more on her paws.So pretty^^ 11:09, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you so much! I smoothed the shading on her paws, and also fixed it on the chest and the main body. I'm glad you all like it ^^ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:27, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Wow, this is beautiful! Could you smooth out the shading a bit more on the tail and above the shoulder? 14:09, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Because you seem to know what you are doing, I'll promote you into an apprentice. As for this image, smooth out the shading on the ears, please. 01:36, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded These compliments really made my day! :D Thank you so much for promoting me into an apprentice <3 As requested, I smoothed out the shading on the shoulder, the tail, and the ears ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:41, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (ES) ~ For Approval
Colours from the ancient. Now, I used a little highlights, just along the back and tail and a little around the left ear and face. I can remove it if she doesn't look black-furred, but I prefer to keep it. 22:22, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading somemore Gorgeouuss 22:28, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder/chest shading a tad. Lovely! 22:48 Thu Oct 22

Reupload Thanks! :) 23:11, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

The pupil size doesnt quite match in ==> that eye and its kinda bothering me. Thicken it by one pixel on > that side of it? 23:34, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Completely forgot to mention the design of the eye is based of Dapplepelt's image so credits to Shinxy for that. 00:10, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (ES) - For Approval
I got told I could have the small amount of white, so I dunno. I can finally post this, jeez. Thank goodness.