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Should Cats of the Park be given satisfactory, or even be nominated for silver? 01:13, August 30, 2015 (UTC)

Monster - Silver Nomination
It looks good. Comments? 03:10, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 22:46, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

Doesn't a monster almost kill Moth Flight in MFV/Secrets of the Clans? It's not in the history... Also, in the Forgotten Warrior, when Cinderheart is shown Cinderpelt's life or something, she remembers being hit by a mosnter, should that be mentioned too? I can add that one if it should be there 00:13, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

Okay. I'll add that soon but if I don't get to it by 2 days can someone do it for me? Applies to allt he nominations down below. 01:05, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

Okay. I can do it for you if you don't want, but for reference it's in the Forgotten Warrior Chapter 18 01:07, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

I added it (and the many appearances from Twilight). CBV? 22:02, January 9, 2016 (UTC)

Fighting Techniques - Silver Nomination
added cites. everything else looks good. Comments? 03:11, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 22:46, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

There's still a few techniques that need cites: Badger Defense, Duck and Spin, Jump and pin; the second example of the belly rake; first example of the teeth grip; What Cedarfur tells Crookedpaw about bushing out fur; first example of roll-over; two of the Dark Forest Techniques 00:28, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

Think I got them all. 04:48, January 5, 2016 (UTC)

I'm really sorry if I sound picky, but still without cites are Badger Defense, Duck and Spin, Jump and pin; the second example of the belly rake; first example of the teeth grip; what Cedarfur tells Crookedpaw about bushing out fur. Other than that, looks great. 02:18, January 6, 2016 (UTC)

Done. 02:23, January 6, 2016 (UTC)

There's only the first example of the teeth grip left that needs a citation. Comments before vote? 22:08, January 9, 2016 (UTC)

Slash's Group ~ Silver Nomination
Credits to who worked on it before me. Comments? 05:12, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Do we know if the cats left the forest for good? And was Willow's name Wilow Tail at the time that you have cited in the camp section? 05:36, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Updated. 05:46, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Any other comments before vote? 22:16, January 8, 2016 (UTC)

Vote's up 00:01, January 12, 2016 (UTC)

Gathering
Thought I should bring this up. The article looks honestly very confusing to use (and base off) and it's really confusing to edit. I've been working on it for a few days yet I can't seem to grasp the basics, for example, not all moons and seasons are mentioned in the Gatherings. Is there anyway we can simplify this? 18:57, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also we kind of need a guideline on how much history an article neds, such as ThunderClan or ShadowClan. Basically it seems like that on some articles, the entire book is used as a summary, yet on others there's hardly anything. We should come up with a basic guideline on how these articles should be formatted, and what should be used.

-Just as a suggestion, but the list of gatherings might be a bit more organized and easy to use if it's like the structure of the Events Timeline? I dunno, I think it would be... 00:40, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

Tribe of Endless Hunting - Silver Nomination
As per my discussion above, I'm not sure if the history needs expansion but I did add what was missing and I think it looks good. Comments? 19:02, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 22:46, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

It looks good, but I know that Feathertail mentions the Tribe of Endless Hunting in Dawn River during a dream, and I would think they probably appeared/were mentioned more in Outcast, since half that book takes place in the mountains right? I have both books borowed from my library right now, so if it's okay with you can I add in DR's section and expand Outcast's?

Also, I counted and it looks like only half of the cats in the category for ToEL members are listed on the actual page... 23:58, January 1, 2016 (UTC)

I suppose it's alright. I will add all of the members soon though. 08:30, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

Actually the reason they're not there is bcause they don't have valid cites. The cites on the page state that it's revealed on Vicky's facebook page when actually there is no link to it. So I don't know if we should get rid of all of these cites on those pages, but I'm going to refrain from using Vicky's facebook page as a cite when there's no link. 04:54, January 5, 2016 (UTC)

The Lake - Silver Nomination
Okay htat looks good as well. I added in stuff that was missing, and see my discussion above, I don't know if it needs expanding or not. 19:04, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 22:46, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

I just searched my Mistystar's Omen ebook for the word lake and in a few of the results there were things about there not being like enough fish in the lake or something even though they got rid of the beaver dam. Shouldn't this be added? I can add it if you want me to. 00:37, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

It's a really, really minor detail. Do you think so? 08:29, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

Well, hunger because of the empty lake is one of the main conflicts in the book, so yes. 15:11, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

Yes but that's mentioned like a lot. So do you really think it's necessary to add it again? 18:46, January 2, 2016 (UTC)

Erm, well there isn't (unless I can't see it) any part on the article about RiverClan's problems, it only briefly states that 2 cats from each Clan get rid of the beaver dam. So I do think it is necessary 22:47, January 4, 2016 (UTC)

Right, I'll add it in soon. 04:49, January 5, 2016 (UTC)

Also, the Lake is mentioned in Dark River (Chapter 19, starting at pg. 303) when the current carries the apprentices from the river to the lake. 23:48, January 6, 2016 (UTC)

The Moth
As per a topic on PC's talk page, should we create an article for the green moth that appears in Moth Flight's Vision? Apparently it holds some significance to the book. 02:45, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

It does hold a lot of significance. The moth actually led Moth Flight to highstones, which helped establish the rank.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  09:28, December 23, 2015 (UTC)

Any other comments to this? 22:46, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it deserves a page to itself, it's quite significant in MFV 23:52, January 1, 2016 (UTC)

As I said before, it should very much have its own page. Would it also be worth comparing it to other significant items within the series, such as Jayfeather's stick and The Stick of the Fallen, and other items along those lines?

Any other comments/anyone against having a page created for the Moth? 23:31, January 8, 2016 (UTC)

Join?
Can I join? I want to help out with Project: World.

Yep, I'll add you in. :) Make sure to read the Guidelines 22:18, January 8, 2016 (UTC)

The Great Battle
(I'm talking about the Early Settler's Great Battle, not the Dark Forest one). So this battle is mentioned a lot, and is kinda significant after it occurs, so doesn't it deserve a page to itself? 00:19, December 26, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, it does deserve a page to itself in my opinion, and if it does receive one it should follow the Dark Forest's pattern. 22:45, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

Actually I think it already has its own page. 19:59, January 1, 2016 (UTC)

Oh... What's it called? 23:48, January 1, 2016 (UTC)

Tail Signals - Silver Nomination
always meant to get back editing in PW and never got around to it, so might as well start now! :> 23:25 Tue Jan 5

Comments before vote? 04:37, January 9, 2016 (UTC)

Tiger ~ Silver Nomination
Credits to those who worked on it before me. Comments? 23:19, January 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you find sources that are not wikipedia (you can look at wikipedia's cites, verify the information and then use those cites on the page)? It's kind of like citing ourselves since wikipedia has a very similar format to wikia. You might also want to bulk up on cites in the description section. 04:50, January 9, 2016 (UTC)

The problem is that pretty much all of the cites are books... unless it's okay if I just cite the book it came from. 15:00, January 9, 2016 (UTC)

Deepsands Gorge
So I plan on writing the appearances, but how exactly is it supposed to work? I'm not really sure if I'm supposed to write every single appearances, or just major ones, such as floods or rogue attacks... Opinions? 01:32, January 10, 2016 (UTC)