Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Blossomfall (W) - Tweaked
paw is brown now 19:22, June 13, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I believe Vec mentioned in the nom; the hind paw closest to us should have some white

Could you also smooth that tail white into the brown so it sticks out a bit more. The queen shows it curving and not looking so straight as you've got here  Ellie  life is an illusion 13:45, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:46, June 16, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Mistystar (A) ~ Tweaked
changing colours without the file is hard lol

reups dunno what happened but the change didn't show on my exported image

This still seems darker than the other images. Perhaps fish around and see if you could get the file from Paleh if she still has it?

reups had to mess around a bit with the shading

The tweaking layers appear to be covering the earpink and eyes - they're dulled from what it was, doesn’t quite match the set anymore rip

Also I'm kinda raining on the parade and for that I'm sorry - but it's still just a little too dark. It should be #a2aaba.

Brightsky (Star) - Tweaked
First tweak. OA is Berry, with tweaks by Stealth (removing eyelashes), Scarlet, and Skt. Tweaked to define the shading and add depth. Just slapped two new shading layers on. 22:03, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste on the > side of the > front leg. I'm also not sure the shading needed to be darkened quite so much.

Can you curve that belly shading too, it shouldn't be as straight as it is  Ellie  life is an illusion 23:41, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed  02:50, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

the body shading could be smoothed out a bit more 19:06 Sun Jun 16

Fixed  20:49, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste on the > side of the cat

Fixed  22:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

There's still waste on that side, and also in varying places

Fixed  00:44, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) ~ Redone
will grab that left belly white to match better to the star, also yes i know there's waste will also get that in my next upload but other than that. Commets?  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:31, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Define the dapples on the ginger patches? They seem more prominent on the StarClanner.

Re-Ups. It didn't have dapples as I can't really tell them out on the star but I tried to add some, I also fixed the white on the belly and removed the waste.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:07, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Runningnose (Star) - Redone
my snuffly boy 18:55 Sun Jun 16

Could you define the shading on the belly area and tail  Ellie  life is an illusion 19:39, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, I think there'd be more shading on the > side (our view) of the tail, and not really any/much on the back

reuploaded i think i understood what you meant. i re-angled the tail shading and i removed some shading from the body. but if you were talking about the back of the tail and not the actual body then i could re-add some lol 02:41 Mon Jun 17

I think some body should would give the images a bit more depth where there isn't as much detailed texture and such. Its all solely your choice I think.  Ellie  life is an illusion 13:47, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (A Alt 2) ~ Redone
OA was Cloudymoon. Redone to match the set. 19:55, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Cinders (Lo) ~ Redone
the white placement varies frame by frame, went with the most consistent bits

Cinders (Q) ~ Redone
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Sol's father ~ Tweaked
OA was a Beautiful Oblivion. Tweaked by Shimmerstripe, Tigerbird, and Spooky. Tweaked to make midtone and add amber eyes. h a p p y   f a t h e r ' s     d a y   03:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)