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Cloudstar (L) - Tweaked
Alright, here's Cloudstar. He needed darker shading, and I changed the earpink beacuse it was purply. Original artist was Sandy. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  15:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 15:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading needs to be blurred, and the haunch shading is blotchy, so fix that. 22:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  14:18, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There seems to be some lineart or something that's leaked into the <--- ear. It's darker then the rest of the area around it. 23:34, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It was some shading, but I lightened it a tad. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:21, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. 14:42, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Suprisingly, the changes are showing ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  15:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  00:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The patches shouldnt be smudged. We dont need to tweak the deputy art to match. 01:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Snaketooth (W) - Redone
Yay, new tabby style. Original artist was Mousetalon, and I redid him to be longhaired. 17:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Darken the stripes ever so slightly and make the earpink more triangular. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:29, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

They eyes are too neon. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 17:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the tail tip, ear-tip, and bottom chest fur. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 19:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did I get them all? 00:59, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

it says he broke his foot, and may not be able to hunt and fight again, maybe twist one of his feet? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not so sure though... 20:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular. 22:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't add a broken leg yet. And the earpink is triangular enough I guess... 23:41, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it blends in to the pelt too much. 22:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Larkwing (MC) ~ Redone
Original artist was Dawnfeather; redone as a shorthair. Comments? 22:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Do you think you could add a stripes in the area that's above her belly and in between her front arm and hanch? Also, there's a few miscolored pixils below her whiskers that are colored green. 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 22:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Ivystripe, but I couldn't add another stripe without ruining the shading, so I just made the other stripe longer. 23:06, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be more silver. Just seems like dark gray tabby right now. 23:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add a couple more stripes as well. 00:24, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Add shading to the herbs. 01:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes towards the base. It looks odd being blurred at the tips, but not quite as blurry at the base of the lineart. 20:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Timberfur (W) ~ Redone
I seriously got tired of seeing the blank in my pictures and not getting around to do this. I rushed this, but it had to be done. Original artist was Mousetalon, and I redid as a longhair. 20:51, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the shading and blur. 20:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ._. I think I killed it xD 20:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs o be more even; and define the earpink. Also confirm the light source, and make sure the highlights are equally light. 22:00, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The highlights have to be equally light, I used white for them. 22:30, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights seem a bit confusing. Does the light come from the back, or the side? Make the shading more consistent. 00:35, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Either way the shading needs to be blurred badly. 01:49, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, they look almost brown right now, and I don't think it's possible for cats to have brown eyes. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:18, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading all together and took out the highlights. I'm sick of doing plain cats.. the shading has to be exact xD  01:34, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower (Q)~ Redone
I'm acctually going to stick with a character! Anyway, OA was Sandstar and it needed to match the warrior. 01:49, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! I envy your toirtoiseshell making skills. *.* Blur the white on the haunch just a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:15, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink ever so slightly and blur it. I wish I could make torties like you. =/ 23:06, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuplaoded- Im not sure the changes are showing, it might just take a moment. The only reason im any good at torties is cause my first one was Sol rogue. It was hard. 23:10, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, just dull the earpink a tiny bit more. It's a little bit bright. =)  Shadewing ''' Blades of the Night  02:06, September 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Brambleclaw (D) - Tweaked
- Er. Ew. This made me gag in the bathroom for twenty minutes straight x_x I just re-did the stripes and shading. And don't ask me to define the ear pink. Love, Waffles. Comments? 01:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. My StarClan, he's amazing! 01:43, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks =) 01:47, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Patchpelt (E) ~ Tweaked
Shading tweak. Original artist is Icethroat. Also, I've blurred as much as GIMP'll let me. 02:24, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the patches in the fuzzy style? Blur the shading at the base of the tail and make the ear-pink less purplish. 03:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks like that because of the shading. You know what, is anyone going to get offended if I re-do it? I promise I'll do all of the others as well. I kinda want to smudge the patches. 03:27, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and smudge the patches =) 03:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, awesome! Thanks! 03:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I say go ahead and redo it. XD It'll probably look better. I think most things look better redone, because it can be really hard to JUST tweak things without making them look worse sometimes. But yeah, I say redo it. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:03, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it now. I'll then re-do the others as well. 04:05, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Here's the horrid re-do. If this doesn't work out, I'll just go back to tweaking the other. Reuploaded. 04:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. A) - Redone
I'm actually pretty fond of this one! :) OA was me, redone as a longhair and reworked the scars on the face. Comments? 03:24, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oooooooooohhhhhh, it's pretty! Thicken the tear on the ear, please. 03:25, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Cloudy! 03:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Olivenose (W) - Redone
I've decided I seriously need some more practice on Tortoiseshells so I decided to do Olivenose's image. XD Anyways, OA was Mousetalon, and the shading needed to be tweaked, and the patches needed to be redone to look more natural. PLEASE don't comment telling me to make the white lighter, it's only dark cause of the shading, it's actually pure white underneath it all and if I lighten the shading it will look flat. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:07, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

O.O .....make the ear pink a tad bigger.... HOLY CRAP DID YOU MAKE THIS?! 04:12, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. And yes I made this. I know. It's horrible. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:36, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just the opposite. I think Iceheart should watch her back. You're really good with this stuff. Blur the tip of the ear pink a bit more. 04:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Pssssssh, you can't even COMPARE me with Iceheart. She's way too epic for me to be compared to her. And yes, this IS horrible. I can't really do Tortoiseshells.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)