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Snowbird (K) - For Approval
First character ever!! (I'm so proud of myself) Echorunner (talk) 12:50, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, I did it for you. This is amazing! :) maybe blur the shading more? There needs to be nose pink as well. This is very good for your first charart The Fox Girl (talk) 12:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

If you are a kit, it should say "For evaluation" instead of "For Approval"- Anyway, please define the shading on the tail and the legs, but great work! :) Burntclaw (talk) 12:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think you can define it everywhere. 13:00 Fri Nov 28

Plus, this should be called File:Snowbird.kit.png. I also fixed the thumbnail. 13:06 Fri Nov 28

Thanks! I'll remember next time!!!!

Remember to sign your posts with four "~"s, also, when ever you re-upload something, remember to notify us by writing something like Re-ups. XD Btw add shading to the legs plz. If you need help with the placement of the shading you can look at the apprentice tutorials. Also, the file is still not named correctly. Burntclaw (talk) 14:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

To rename it, just rename it in the next upload The Fox Girl (talk) 14:26, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, it makes less work for admins (maybe) if you wait and have an admin rename it for you. 14:54, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please, it's much easier to just let me rename it. Which I just have. I'm also gonna change the heading to "For Approval" since I think this is good for an apprentice-rank promotion tbh.

Along with defining the shading on the legs and tail, maybe add another layer of shading on top of the existing one at a lower opacity ro create some depth? 21:07, 11/28/2014

Blur the earpink a bit? The Fox Girl (talk) 07:12, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It looks plenty blurred enough to me. 21:36, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink, actually? 03:47, 11/30/2014

Sharpen the shading a bit, it looks flat. Burntclaw (talk) 00:15, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Just a friendly reminder: please remember to re-upload your image by Friday(Dec. 5th) or it may be declined. Since when you don't upload for seven days it is considered lack of work. (Yes I know this is a leads' job, but nobody had said anything so...please don't be mad at me). 19:26, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

She actually did, she just forgot to reup Burntclaw (talk) 02:45, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs, also define the shading on the tail. The Fox Girl (talk) 05:02, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Well I'm now just seeing changes so I don't believe she already did before I posted that message. Unless wikia is broken again. But if forgetting to say reup is the case, she could still get her image declined if we don't know what we're looking at. That's just the way the boat floats, and I'm just trying to warn her ahead of time before she has to experience that. Back to the image, define the facial shading and define the depth of the body shading. This is looking really good! 14:07, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, please. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:12, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

The white is looking a tad bit gray, maybe give the shading a dark blue tint to help it? I know tint isn't required but it would help. 00:37, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Echorunner, please remember to say "Re-uploaded" or "Re-ups" so we know you've uploaded a new version of your image. Thank you. 13:46, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

This was last reuploaded on the 7th, as shown by the file history. It doesn't take much of anything to look at the history and see, honestly. Just to be sure, you're still working, right, Echorunner? I haven't seen you comment on this section in a while, so I just want to double-check.

Oh, i forgot about this! My computer wasn't letting me comment on a lot of stuff on wiki and youtube... thats why and yes, i am still working on it (and my practice characters)--Echorunner (talk) 00:37, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define light on the tail. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:38, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. Brick  The Bite of '87  09:11, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Brightflower (Ki) - CBA
Tried out Jayie's shading style which I love <3. I adore her cute lil' muzzle. The eyes are larger because in her description it states that she has "wide-set amber eyes" so I just wanted to add emphasis on that. Colour & design taken from the warrior & queen pixels. all the kittens    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:51, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Forgot the pale paws. ._.    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:59, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I fixed the alignment for you^^ Also, define the stripes a bit, as they're more pronounced on her other images. And define the shading & shading depth. This is pretty =) 13:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the eyes are normal on the other images, and you //need// to match that, so make them normal size please. And define the shading. 13:53, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you Frosty for fixing the alignment! I've defined the stripes, shrunk the eyes, shading & shading depth. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:05, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? 03:45, 11/30/2014

can you blur and maybe thicken the shading everywhere not on the head? 03:49, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? I kinda can't see them. This is really cute, though.

Re-uploaded - Thank you! All change have been added, although having some trouble with the stripes. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is making her looks pretty green in those areas. Try tinting it a dark red? 00:34, 12/2/2014

The only place she "looks green" is probably the paws. Everywhere else looks fine to me, imho. Again, as I've said before, tinting shading is not mandatory, Ruefrost, so please do not think you're under any obligation to do so- you can do whatever you're comfortable with doing.

Lighten the shading, I can't see the pattern through it. It could also be expanded a bit, 'cause she's looking a tad bit flat. 15:30, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened the shading, defined the pattern, tweaked the muzzle slightly & define the shading (kinda..)   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:38, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? The shading still looks green on the paws. The Fox Girl (talk) 03:08, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. The Fox Girl (talk) 06:21, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 14:22, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the paws? It looks.. blotchy, for lack of a better word? If you think its fine, feel free to ignore me. :)-- 20:50, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Completed all of the above. Defined the leg/foot shading to make it darker and more noticeable. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:58, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten your shading I can't see the pattern through it. And I personally think that the black shading is throwing the color off a bit. I strongly recommend you tint your shading. But if you wish not to, I will not longer speak of it. 21:02, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Um, did I not say before don't say to tint the shading if they haven't already? It's already been mentioned multiple times, and if she would have wanted to, she'd have done it before now. Seriously, please stop asking. This goes for everyone. I think the black shading looks fine. You can use black on anything and it'll look just fine- I rarely ever tint my shading and most of mine is actually pure black. =/

Oh whoops I didn't know it had already been mention. :x I rarely tint mine either, it's 95% of the time black. But sometimes when it's a certain base color you have to accommodate so it doesn't look like it's clashing. Unless you put it on super super light and then you can't see it. Meh anyway sorry for repeating. But my comment still stands on lightening the shading^^ 03:45, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - It's fine Frosty don't stress. I probably should of told you (my bad).Thank you to for telling Snow. I've lightened the shading. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Im sorry for breaking the CBA, but can you please lighten the paw shading? It looks really dark and hard-edged as it is now.-- 04:22, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

The shading in between the legs, too ^^ 22:51, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened paw shading I don't wish to lighten it any more else the shading will be too light. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:57, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Let's try again, shall we? If you lighten anything anymore, you really won't be able to see it at all.

Ashheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried Jayie's shading. All colors from the warrior image, which I'm the OA of. Comments? 21:57, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the chest? 22:22, 12/1/2014

Reuploaded. 22:33, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source and blur the shading a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the light source just fine, though I'll change it if others agree. As for the blurring, I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur or smudge her shading. 00:53, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading above the hind leg could be defined more 05:32, 12/2/2014

Reuploaded. Changes |here. I'll fix the waste next. 21:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on this <-- front paw. 03:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:35, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I honestly cannot tell where the light is coming from on this source. The head tells me it's coming from straight above, the chest tell me it's coming from the left, and the legs and side tell me it's coming from the right. 13:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to change the shading again unless it's either absolutely necessary or involves dulling the highlights. 13:33, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs and blur it everywhere else. 03:46, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just defined the shading, as I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur her shading. 16:06, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth out the shading somehow? I know it seems silly, but this looks a bit too abrupt, for lack of a better word? I'm sorry, I'm mobile and can't fully explain what I mean.

Reuploaded. I redid the whole shading. 21:12, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

define the face shading and maybe blur the right side chest shading, lookin good. 00:30, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 01:59, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth the shading out a little more? Maybe blur it or something, idk. 17:40, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:02, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more, please?

Okay so I did that on mobile yesterday and it totally didn't go where it was supposed to. =/

Ok, by that, do you mean the comment was supposed to go on a different image, or what? Sorry, I'm just confused. 21:49, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, I was in a hurry when I typed that. It was meant to go on this image, but it just went above a different comment, despite me being at the right part of the page...aka I really shouldn't edit from my phone.

Reuploaded. Redid the shading again. 22:21, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a bit. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:04, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:08, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Jay's Wing (Ki) - For Approval
Can't make Stormcloud co-operate, so have this in the meantime 18:55, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some. They're more blurred than this on his Sharplaw and Softpaw images. 19:11 Sat Dec 6

reups 19:48, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten the body shading and smudge the ear pink a bit?

yes 17:07, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial and tail shading a bit. Gahh I wanted this XD you did such a lovely job with him though, much better than I could've ever done with him. =) 03:40, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

reups 16:27, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

I'm sorry for breaking the CBA, but could you define the shading on the legs and smooth it out on some areas? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 14:02, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Palebird (Alt Q.) ~ For Approval
She looks like my own cat :) A question:Can i have a kit up for approval in the same time with this image? 14:42, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but no, because this counts as a new image. 19:00 Sun Dec 7

Ok,thanks for the answer 19:10, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

I thought the queens count as a redone image and we are allowed to have a kit on the approval page at the same time...? Or something along those lines. Ignore me if I'm wrong. 00:04, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

only those tht had images previously count and palebird didn't so this counts as a new image. 00:06, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. This looks very nice! =) 02:32, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thx:) 19:08, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define light on the back right leg. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:08, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 16:56, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Cloudberry (Ki) ~ For Approval
There are never too many kits. Comments?

Define the light on the tail.

Blur/smudge the ear pink. The Fox Girl (talk) 07:45, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Defined the light on the tail, also defined the light on her <= paw because of the light source and blurred the ear pink.

Define shading on the left front paw and tail. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:37, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're both fine; I can see the shading on those parts very well. 16:53, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Shadow (Ki) ~ For Approval
Have a baby Shadow. 20:18, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Wikia doesn't want to upload Shadow, so here she is. 20:31, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Wikia uploaded it. :) 23:00, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

Re-uploaded 02:19, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink almost looks like it's falling out of the ears. Lol may you put it back in the ears? this is looking great! 19:14, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ^^''' 03:26, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Darken her base color? It looks dark gray. The Fox Girl (talk) 07:44, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Meh I think that is because of the highlight on the chest. If you look, as you move away from the highlight down to the legs, it's black. So I think it's alright, unless the highlight is so big it's throwing other people off.. Maybe shrink it a bit? 13:27, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

The highlight only has a 0.8 opacity, so it's hardly visible. Also, I colorpicked from her other images so the base color is probably okay. 00:55, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Even though it is that dim, on a black cat it is extremely noticible. Would you just dim it down a tad so its not confusing us with the real color? 22:49, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:28, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Fritz (RP) (Ki) - CBA
I had so much fun with this..and I think it turned out wonderfully. Comments? 21:44, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

There's a faint texture on the white as well for the kittypet. It's hard to see, but it's there. I would know- I made that image based off a different one. Also move the collar down a couple pixels- it seems too far up near the head.

Re-uploaded. Thanks for telling me that..my eyes are pretty damn awful, so I wasn't sure if that was texture or an effect from the shading. Also I moved the collar down a few pixels^^ 22:42, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Language... Besides that could you define the ear pink? Really all it is, is grey. Like it a lot, though User:NikiandCats 23:33, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

'Damn' is an acceptable word to use here. It's used all the time and since we're all 13 or older, we can handle a word like that. She was fine in using it as she was talking about herself and not directing it towards another user or their work.

Re-uploaded.  Thank you~ That was the color I had picked from the kittypet's ear, but I defined it by altering it a shade or two, but that's all I'll alter it. And yeah as they said^^ 00:07, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on the tail? This looks nice! ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:19, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! 00:33, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, fixed some things hoping that'll get this approved faster. 04:09, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Brighten up the white and lighten up the shading just a bit. It's throwing off the color and making this look darker than his kittypet. Or, as an alternative, you could always thin out the shading. Also, I dunno if you got it, but the base is #B8B8B8. You probably can't tell because of the texture, so I thought I'd give you the coding.

Re-uploaded. Thanks for the coding, I think I was a few shades off before.. Also I screwed around with the shading until the white wasn't gray and the shading wasn't throwing off the color. 19:23, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading and tail shading? 03:52, 12/11/2014

I'd say define the shading in general. I can hardly see it anywhere. 04:00, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. eep you guys are killing me. XD But seriously this last upload is all I can define it or else we'll be back to where I was told to lighten it all up, and we'll have darkened white and messed up color. So yeah. 13:21, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little, please? 18:26, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I trust your judgment all the way Shinx, but could I get a second opinion? I'm afraid if I define it anymore that the white won't be white anymore and that the color will be thrown off again. As long as it's making it more visible, I might be able to do that, but darkening is a no. So may I get another opinion? Thanks. 02:28, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Have another layer of shading that's unblurred a bit on a lower opacity. That should fix the issue. I think it could be defined a bit, and you can do that without making it darker at all.

Re-uploaded. Did as suggested. 14:49, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Fallen Leaves (Ki) - CBA
Tiny Fallen Leaves *.* All colors are from the .psd of the softpaw.

can u darken or define the shading or something i cant see it at all 23:23, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

I think the stripes are a little bit lighter on his softpaw image. Maybe lighten them up a little bit? 03:28, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Lighten them just a teensy bit more especially on the head. This is beautiful, you did wonderfully. 14:14, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. lmao all the stripes are on one layer, so if I lighten the head, I lighten all of them. They only look lighter on the softpaw than the kit because of the size of the blank, imho. I don't have as much "play room" on this than I do the other blank.

Your light source is a bit off. Where is it supposed to be coming from? 2:29 Sun Dec 14 2014

theres nothing wrong with it its easy enough to tell its coming from the upper left. 05:14, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry David I'm gonna have to agree with Whiskey. 13:07, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

how? is exactly the same source as pinestars kit, they told me that themself. no one had a problem with that so why suddenly a problem with this? maybe if you'd look you could see its coming from the left? 13:19, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna slide in here and agree with Skt. It's literally the same as many other kit images, including ones that were only approved recently, so there should be no problem. Although I wouldn't mind the shading being defined a little. 14:53, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Well I took another look, David, and I changed my mind; you're right I can see now it's coming from the left. 17:45, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded to Shinx's comment. ^^ It's the same source as Pinestar's kit, just with the head shading tweaked (flipped, I think) as I was told to do last time.

CBA? 12:51, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Fish Leap (K) - For Approval
Had fun with the pattern, not sure the shading color matches as well as I'd like. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:23, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the base a bit- it looks to be a bit lighter on the softpaw. I have no idea how she even made that but you matched it quite well.

I grabbed the color for the base from the lightest pixel I could find. I'll lighten it a touch, but I think lightening the shading might work better and still have the intended effect. And thanks. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:48, December 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Played around with the shading and the base color. Jayie Unwritten words~

Define the shading on the front legs. This is beautiful, Jayie! =) 03:34, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

tbh, it looks fine. It looks dark enough. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:27, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Um define doesn't mean darken all the time. It means "make more visible". I think it could be defined a bit more. ^^ 14:12, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Just on the leg to our left tbh <span style="">21:08, 12/13/2014

Ack, sorry this took so long. Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:20, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
omg don't kill me for ruining Sparrow's images please <span style="">18:30 Tue Dec 9

Thin out the pale chest and define the shadin. This looks nice! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest edges into the fur more. He looks amazing, you did a fine job, Amber! 00:42, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the ear pink more. You made him purrty :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:51, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

the pale part on his face should only go up to his nose. 04:29, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks everybody ^-^ <span style="">18:03 Wed Dec 10

Define shading. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is dark enough. In fact, I think it could be lightened up a tad. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:31, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

It needs to be defined, defining doesn't just mean darkening. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:33, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a bit? I can't see the pattern through the shading. Nice job Amber. ^^ 01:52, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Just saw that Fox said that already. ^^ 01:58, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

Oops, forgot to reup ^^ <span style="">12:55 Mon Dec 15

Thin out the pale chest, also lighten it up to match his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 14:00, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (Kit) ~ For Approval
He's so cute :p ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:17, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading (so kawaii :3) 13:50, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Could you darken the left ear pink a bit? It kind of.... Stands out and you want it to be as perfect as possible <3 Its beautiful for a tom <3    NikiandCats (talk) 01:03, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks! ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:35, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Darkened the stripes to match with the warrior image. Btw if this gets approved, do I become a warrior? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:41, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading everywhere, and if it's the 3rd one yes. 01:20, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

I cant see his pattern through the shading at all; please lighten it. Remember, define doesn't automatically mean darken; it means to make more visible, as in unblurring/unsmudging, etc. Right now, it looks too dark. 05:57, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Meep. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 08:14, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink in ---> this ear. I love this, you did a great job. 13:04, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks! ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:03, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki)~ For Approval
Woo~  First white cat (I really hope I did this right I don't wanna redo another charart :/) 11:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define ur light source. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:48, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up, too. It's making the white look pretty gray. 13:41, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

She's not supposed to be white. She should be a light color, hence why she looks off-white. The base from the kittypet is #E3E5E2. I'm also gonna rename this for you, since it should be File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png.

Should I change the pelt color then and reup? 11:17, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I suggest you to color pick off the apprentice image and just change the base color. The Fox Girl (talk) 13:18, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks hard edged, maybe blur it more? Then define it everywhere. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Meh that would put her back to where she is now. Just blur the edge of the shading dear, that should fix it up and save you a lot of stress. But define the depth just a tad, like darken it where the creases are and where there would be less light. You're doing wonderfully~ 02:33, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Jet (Ki) ~ For Approval
looooooong fur! --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:47, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I think he's supposed to have earpink because the loner image has it.. I don't know if earpink is supposed to match. 01:49, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

>< reupload that's how focused on the shading I was. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:15, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
here we go again. 21:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Again, remove the patchy fur. That cite is from Sign of the Moon, which is long after he was a kit. Given that he's also a kit, I don't think he'd have any of the mud either- kits aren't allowed outside of the cave. I'm also renaming this to File:Stoneteller_(NP).kit.png, =P

I thought she's not allowed to repost the same image for a whole week?? That happened with me and Dawnpelt and I was told I couldn't re-reserve & repost until a week had past. Wouldn't the same go for this? Sorry if I'm wrong or missed something. 02:36, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

I said that with you because you had done it mutiple times already and disregarded me quite a few times when we told you why. You've not only done that with Dawnpelt, but a few others as well. Breeze has only done this once, therefore she should only get the declined image.

Um I've never disregarded anybody here. And I honestly don't remember any of those situations you are referring to. But regardless of any of that, it says in the rules and regulations at the top that if your image is declined you must wait a week before reclaiming your image, so it gives other users a chance to work on it. I thought we go by the rules here, not past mistakes which I'm truly sorry for. I was young and stupid, and I can say proudly I've matured and do not act like that anymore. 03:45, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

It says at the top of the page the following: This is to prevent users who've had images for longer than one month to pass it on to another artist. There is nothing about one week. I would know- I'm the one that added that because we had so many people trying to keep the image. Regardless, you haven't done that in a while, and I think you might need to recheck the top of the page again, because there's nothing about one week- only the two week one for people who've had images for a month.
 * If your image has been declined due to the one month limit, you must wait two weeks to reclaim your image. This gives other users the chance to work on it if they wish.

Also, I did what I did with you with permission from the leader of the project, since it was clear you were not going to abide by the rules back then. There is nothing at the top of the page as of current that says what you claim it does. It's an unwritten rule going off the "your image is yours until it is archived". I extended it to try and get you to see what you had done wrong. It worked, and I'm glad to see that.

agreeing with skye here. breezey hasn't done this before, i do not think? (it is 10 at night, forgive me-) 03:56, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Oh I understand now. Thanks for clarifying and I guess you're right I don't see it there. I guess it did work lol thanks for teaching me that; it saved a lot of headaches. Okay sorry for interrupting!! Carry on~ 03:59, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:58, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Jessy (Ki) ~ For Approval
I really meant for this to be up earlier whoops 18:43, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Make the collar larger, as it'd be pretty big on a kit. This is pretty! 22:46, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

The size itself is fine. Given that there are some pretty thin collars out there, they'd still appear "normal" sized on a kit. It's clear that this collar is too big for Millie because of how it's positioned. If it were too small, then it would probably be moved. This is also the lineart from my version of Millie's kit, and I was told that the size itself was okay to use.

Lily (Ki) ~ For Approval
my rabbit's name is Lily, too 19:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the brown just a bit? The face is really bright on the kittypet compared to the rest of her body.

Reups 19:21, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the face brown too? That looks a different color than the rest, and I'm pretty sure that's just one big highlight on her KP. It's such an old image wow

Make the collar larger since itd be pretty big on a kit. You did a lovely job! 22:47, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a touch. <span style="">2:25 Sun Dec 14 2014

Reups 21:08, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Darkstripe (ki) ~ for approval
he may be trash but his kit form is a precious cinnamon roll, too good for this world, too pure 23:52, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Just blur/smudge the stripes a tiny tad? All of it except the muzzle. Also, define the shading a bit? --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:59, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 14:01, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Slate (Ki) ~ For Approval
23:04, December 14, 2014 (UTC)

Cute! Maybe define the shading a bit? Also, would you like the file? 00:25, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Dustpelt (Ki) - For Approval
Ok, I don't know if chararts can be done in a day, but anyway, this is my first charart! I used PAINT.NET for this one. He's so cute! How can I improve? This is my first charart, so I may not be familiar with everything. Hope it's ok!