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Shrewtooth (W) - Redone
Comments? :3 OA was Dappleclaw. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ;3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'highlights', darken the shading on the back, add depth to the eye (or define it), and to add on to what Skt said, make the earpink more triangular. 16:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC).

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 18:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

For some reason it's not reuploading and sparking Mooneh rage. >.> 18:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I got it. Re-uploaded. 18:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Move the ear pink more into the ear and lower the opacity a tiny bit. 19:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit as well~ 23:07, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading. 03:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had the black cat expert around me, and this happened. x3 00:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 00:50, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:13, 04 09, 2012

Darken the whole image a bit? He looks dark gray now. 07:29, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit too red. Make a bit more pinkish? 21:10, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:14, 04 11, 2012 13:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Okay...now can you define the shading? x3 13:32, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:07, 04 12, 2012

The earpink is too small, fix that. Also, darken the earpink to a more redder hue, but, as a dull red, and lighten up the whole image. I can hardly see the lineart. 01:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ...I read your comment wrong. -goes to fix earpink again- Anyway, I'm not making it lighter because I was already asked to make it darker as it looked dark gray, so if I do...yeah. 04:43, 04 13, 2012

Oh, then can you lighten up the shading on the hindlegs and the top of the neck/head? 06:15, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:29, 04 15, 2012

Runningwind (A) ~ Redone
Here it is. I tried really hard, so... Comments away! Oh, and OA was Leaf-storm.

05:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The color looks like it has a little more yellow in it than the warrior. 22:55, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:22, April 10, 2012 (UTC

Define the haunch/tail shading. My gosh, Thistle, this is so perrty~<3 09:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thankies. :3 23:04, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the brown a tad duller. :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:23, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes fade out just a bit. 05:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean by 'fade out'. o3o 01:42, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think she's saying make the tips of the stripes fade instead of them being pointy...like the warrior, perhaps. 04:45, 04 13, 2012

Bah. I've tried every technique I know, and none of them make anything fade. Is it okay if it doesn't have faded stripes... I think it looks okay without the fade and I can not figure out how to make them fade. ;w; 04:39, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle, it has to match. I can't help you with this (I anyways made this image with PSE), sorry. But, it needs to match. Maybe try using pixlr's smudge tool. 04:52, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Phewph. I figured it out, guys! 8D (Thank youuuu, Ivyheart. <3) 00:42, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) - Redone
Oh god. I made it too red didn't I. ;-; OA is Hiddensun, and his colour had to match his apprentice/deputy image. Maple On dA and Skye

00:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC) OA and reason for redo? And yeah, I think you might have made it a bit too red, desaturate him a bit. 03:29, 10, 04, 2012

There's waste all around the image, Maple. 05:58, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors are off, and the highlights look a bit pink, could you fix that? 06:46, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Waste removed, Highlights fixed, and less red. :D Next? Maple On dA and Skye 21:07, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors still don't match. :S 23:19, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit of waste on the left border. 07:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Colour taking isn't working. >.< So I redid it, cause the shading is bugging me. Maple On dA and Skye 18:03, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.' Wait, fixed colour. Thanks Cloudy. :3 Maple On dA and Skye 11:17, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste aaround his muzzle. -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 13:02, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 16:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you just blur the shading more? 06:16, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 16:32, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading a tad more. 19:12, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) ~ Redo
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a girl? ouo 19:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

To confirm, I did a tweak on it. I noticed you weren't sure. 19:56, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading a lot. 23:42, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Does this shading make more sense? 17:02, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing, reupload it again so we can at least see it in the file history? 19:26, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I uploaded it again but I'm not sure that it'll show the changes. 00:14, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Bramblestar (A) - Tweaked
Hey guys! I put a pale belly on him. 8D OA was BeautifulOblivion. Comments? 03:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Realized there was waste on muzzle. 03:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

He needs paleness on the underside of his tail. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge it, please, and have it come further up his neck to match the other images. 04:36, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Also, it needs to be darker and under the stripes, not on top of them... are you the OA for this version of the image? Because I noted in my nomination that first dibs go to OAs that have the layered files. 04:38, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's also some waste around his chin and chest. 00:07, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I don't have the Original file sooooo. I guess I'm giving this up. ono 03:26, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Next time, please remember to change the heading. Anyone with a free project may take over. 19:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No actually Ivy, they can't. XD The old OA of this has to take over. :P That's why Thistle withdrew it. XD 22:57, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

All right, all right. I'll do it >.> Rowanclaw's getting neglected again... 23:01, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:28, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the muzzle and belly just a bit. 04:48, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ಠ_ಠ 13:39, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Duke (KP) ~ Redone
Woo 8D I know the earpink is weird, I'm fixing it in a moment...the collar, ears, and eyes are the exact same, so I'm not changing them. Comments? :3 17:12, 04 11, 2012

The eyes look kinda pixily, make the eye gradient smooth  17:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, I can't really see it. 17:17 Wed Apr 11

Re-uploaded. 17:37, 04 11, 2012

Maybe make the black on the haunch curve a bit more? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 10:04, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail stripe to make it flow with the pelt more. Skt, I can't, because I'd have to paint over or remove what's on the haunch now, remember how I blurred so it looked the same, and then it would curve...I tried, and it looked unnatural. Sorry Dx 12:00, 04 12, 2012

Psssh, no apologise, twas just a suggestion. ;3 Make the nose pink a little less neon, and define the earpink a smidge? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">13:32, 04 12, 2012

Define the shading towards the end of the tail  00:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">20:36, 04 15, 2012

Redwillow (W) ~ Tweak
Haven't done a tweak/redo in a bit, so I though I would just do this. ono And plus I love Dark Forest cats cx Needed a torn ear. 00:57, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a bit shallower. If that much of his ear had been ripped in that direction, the entire top of his ear would likely be gone. 01:45, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this okay? 22:03, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (A) - Redone
OA was Shimmerpool with a redo with the new blanks by our wonderful, talented, and epic Mountainheart. Needed to match other chararts. Comments? 03:38, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken and smudge the stripes a bit, and add a back stripe. Though it's hard to see on his other images, it's there, and so it should be added. 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't think the changes yet 03:50, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyflower (W) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows. The smudges were blurred and looked like blobs, and the shading could have been defined a tad. To me she looks kind of bare now D:. 19:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I love it<3 Blur the smudge on the haunch. 21:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Add more patches, this way it's unrealistic. I also suggest blurring the patches, since they look hard-edged, or, smudge it more dramaticly using a bigger brush like the pervious version. Define the earpink and enlarge it. 01:14, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. Good job Silver! <span style="">03:54, 14, 04, 2012

Reuploaded I killed it... D:  14:21, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the patch on the haunch. 19:04, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Which version are you looking at Shade? xD Sorry. The one with not many patches, or more patches? 19:08, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded   11:08, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (Le) ~ Redone
... :3 Comments? 00:37, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Something about the chest shading's funny. I'm not quite sure what it is, but it makes the chest look.... flat. Not sure what the problem is exactly, but could you try fixing it? 16:21, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful. Lighten the shading down the back a bit. And who was the OA? (Unless we don't have to put that anymore, I just got back here). 19:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

I think the chest shading looks fine. Since this is a short-haired cat, it shows the muscle structure of the shoulders well. 68.103.240.28 01:41, April 15, 2012 (UTC) (Whoops. That was me. Breeze  whisker  01:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC))

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ Redone
...Paleh watched me make this. I failed on her previous version. XD 00:43, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bigger? 14:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:35, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Watched? XD I helped you make her. :P Blur the earpink a little dear. 16:23, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and blur the face/neck shading a tiny bit. 10:04, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shhhh. XD 03:33, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (A) ~ Redone
Um OA was DJ. Comments? 04:58 Sat Apr 14

I don't how dark the stomach looks. Could you maybe lighten it, but keep in in shade so the light source is consistent? If you'd rather keep it like that, then do. Breeze whisker  22:52, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:04 Sun Apr 15

Feathertail (A) ~ Tweaked
She needed a plumy tail. 8D First tweak~ *is failed* 23:39, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and the OA was Maplefern, with a tweak by Rainwhisper, a redo by Mounty, and another redo by Leaf-storm. 00:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the lineart, make the "bristles" (don't really wanna use that word, but I can't think of anything better) smoother and more flowing (think Squirrelflight but smoother; or maybe like a very silky, fluffy fox tail), and round the tip and make it "arch" a bit. It kinda looks like her tail got very surprise/scared xD 01:01, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So, something like this? :3 09:53, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the lineart on the tail look thicker than the rest of the image? If so, could you thin it out one pixle. 19:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:29, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Birchstar (RC) ~ Tweaked
Yay! I added shading to it. How's it look? OA was Spottedwing, with a tweak by Iceheart, and a redo (at least I think it's a redo, it looks like it) by Splashpelt. Comments? 05:33, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

...I thought I had dibs on this? Nevermind, then. Blur the shading a touch. :3 Maple On dA and Skye 11:45, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. DDDD: I'm so sorry! I thought I checked but didn't see anything... If you want this back, just ask. o///o Gah, I'm such a noob. 14:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderleg (A) ~ Redone
OA was Ivyheart, and it should match the warrior, and no offense, the shading was a tad blotchy.

Spiderleg (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Darkhallows, with a redo by me. It wasn't dark enough to be black. xD

Make the chest less blurry; it's not even close to matching his warrior O-o 15:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't even think to fix that..whoops.

Bumblestripe (A) - Redone
OAs were Featherwillow, Atelda, and Mountainheart, and I believe it needed redone for unrealistic stripes. Any comments for improvement? 22:07, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lol this image XD Darken the shading and make it slightly redish brownish tinted like the warrior. 22:09 Sun Apr 15

Petalnose (KP) ~ Redone
OA was Nightfall101, shading needed to be redone. I think I should blur it more... Comments? And who likes the Wildy collar? 22:22, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Nice collar x3 Blur the shading so that it blends more with the highlights/unshaded parts and define the earpink. 23:37, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Redone
I probably need to blur the shading here too. OA was Goldencloud tweaked by Appledash. Comments? 22:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make tthe earpink smaller, and yes, blur the shading. 23:08, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was the amazingly epic guild master. Comments? 04:51 Mon Apr 16

The white part on the chest looks sort of slanted. Straighten it? :3 08:04, April 16, 2012 (UTC)