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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. -- 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

These are lovely and I can't see anything to comment on, so CBA? 23:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

sorry, but i feel like the blank looks slightly too crowded in general. notably the face (might help if you remove some of the lines on the ears ig?), and how does the blank look with those three lines removed on the cat's back leg? also, i feel like the tail still looks too straight–feel like a cats tail would naturally be more bent in such a position. 04:52, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

also, i feel like the linearart thickness is pretty uneven on the shorthaired blank– it's extremely thick on the cat's back and on the leg in which the paw pads are exposed but thin in other places. 04:54, August 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded The tail is based of something like this https://www.omlet.co.uk/images/cache/1024/604/Cat-Chartreux-a_plush_coated_chartreux_cat_lying_down.jpg]] with the tail being straight and just the tip being curled. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:39, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

That, to me, still shows it curving a bit more than what you've currently got here. I'd also maybe suggest shortening the leg with the visible toe beans? Not sure if you'd see that much leg from this angle, especially when you look at the blank without a tail.

I honestly think the tail looks fine. A cats tail is always flat to the ground 23:44, 8/05/2019

CBA? 04:48, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry but my comment about the leg showing the beans being too long, still stands as a part of my comment above.

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:18, August 13, 2019 (UTC)

One last thing, I promise, but the fur on our left backleg looks very clumpy, and I think it could be smoothed out more to match the other blanks style for that area (if that makes sense?) and with that, the same would be applied to the other leg too

Reuploaded Wasn't quite sure of what was being asked, and I didn't know which blank was being referred to either, but if I'm not mistaken it is the left blank. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:55, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

I meant the longhair one sorry!

Featherpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
18:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred and need to be thinner. Define the eye depth and light on the foreleg. -- 18:57, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

She needs short fur. 18:58, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

oh shoot, sorry patch. 19:02, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:53, August 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

This needs to match to the apprentice's side in terms of the stripes. -- 20:55, August 2, 2019 (UTC)

There is also some waste in front of the head, by the back legs and around the butt. (Am I allowed to say that?)  Windsong   Run with the wind... ❀ 16:18, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

you can call the bottom area the haunch. sorry for being inactive. 17:48, August 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 15:55, August 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Sharpen the stripes more, and the stripes are thinner and darker. -- 16:11, August 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and remove some on the tail and foreleg. 03:50, August 7, 2019 (UTC

'''reuploaded. '''

The stripes are too dark, and there should be more in general. -- 17:06, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Her stripes appear more horizontal on her other images. Reference the apprentice for them since it's on the same side. 19:11, August 7, 2019 (UTC)

Try to curve the stripes so that they look like they are on a 3D surface.

'''reuploaded. '''

Give the stripes some variation, just so they don't look the same. Also, match the stripes to her apprentice. -- 16:42, August 9, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:15, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

Stripes are too dark, and they should be smudged more to match the other images in her set. -- 03:03, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. '''

Define the light source. -- 15:12, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 20:44, August 10, 2019 (UTC)'''

There is some waste floating around her face, ear, and legs. Add some shading around her neck, kinda in the shape of a collar as seen here. -- 20:46, August 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:50, August 11, 2019 (UTC)'''

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and smudge the stripes a little. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 21:19, August 11, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:14, August 11, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smudge the stripes more. <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  10:26, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

''i can't, or else the the stripes will be all.. blurry. 18:06, August 12, 2019 (UTC)''

Try a 1px smudge tool with a low rate to see if that works. The light should be defined some on the tail and foreleg. -- 18:17, August 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 21:25, August 14, 2019 (UTC)'''

reuploaded. 23:15, August 14, 2019 (UTC)

Redline for the pattern. The apprentice's shoulder stripes are not cooperating with this blank -.- Also add some shading in the stomach area and smooth out the tail shading. The stripes also appear darker on the other images. 15:14, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thank you. ''' 18:45, August 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light some on the tail? Since it's a small space, I would erase with a 1px eraser and dust off a few pixels touching the haunch, then smooth it out. -- 13:46, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred a bit, then it looks like they were smudged vertically with a small brush, probably 1px. 15:01, August 17, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:19, August 22, 2019 (UTC)'''

Darken the stripes a little, and try smudging them with a 1px brush vertically. 02:48, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (K) - For Approval
Welp let's do this!Moo (talk) 20:07, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

this should b longhaired. 20:09, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

U sure? Oki!Moo (talk) 20:16, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, the rest of her images are long-haired, as seen on the charart section of her page. The kit needs to match them. ​​​​

There should be dapples on the black and ginger, not stripes. -- 21:26, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

I've added you to the reservation table. Please add your images and the date you reserved them in the future. ^^ 22:18, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded-This better?Moo (talk) 22:30, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

The dapples are bigger and fainter, and more blurred. Smooth out the shading, since it's a little sharp, and also define the light on the foreleg. -- 22:41, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did what you guys said and fixed the leg which was still png O.O Moo (talk) 23:10, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

The dapples look too big, they should be medium size (reference the apprentice since it shares the same side). I think the dapples should be defined a bit on the black as well. -- 23:13, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dapples better? Moo (talk) 23:48, August 20, 2019 (UTC)

Yes! But they should be more faint, because she's described as having "very faint dapples". -- 00:04, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded How 'bout now? Moo (talk) 00:17, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't be nearly as much white on the tail. The tail needs to match the general style the other images follow, specifically the apprentice, in this case, since they match sides - which has the ginger and then the black at the end half for the most part

Reuploaded Spots should be better nowMoo (talk) 20:28, August 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the dapples on the black. The dapples should also flow more and point in the direction of the fur, and should have more variety in how they are shaped (see warrior for ex). -- 01:50, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedMoo (talk) 03:48, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the dapples should be smaller and more clustered together. I also think there should be a little bit of orange peeking out on the forearm, and a little bit of white on the haunch (see app). 14:24, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?Moo (talk) 04:13, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

the yellow/orange seems paler on her other images. 21:25, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''looks kind of cold now though Moo (talk) 22:18, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. --<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 08:12, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 08:39, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

On the apprentice, the ginger goes all the way up the front of the haunch and connects with the patch on the tail. It could be expanded a bit on the shoulder too and cover a little bit of the flank. Nice job so far! 02:46, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 04:03, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

the white on the left of the back leg closest to us looks blueish-grayish. i don't know if it's the shading or something. 05:20, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Note to self- Add new layer with white on it for the above mentioned spot --Moo (talk) 09:41, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Quietkit (K) ~ CBA
<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:23, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

i think with these family tree only kiddos - the colours should match their icons (on the pages)

Looking at the old kit, it appears it's a pointed tabby- which means the stripes on the body should be removed. (unless the old image doesn't count) -- 21:33, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Old designs should be kept unless someone asks to redo it. The old image should still be matched, all while tweaking the colors as Max suggested. ​​​​​

reuploaded --<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 21:00, August 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading/shading depth some? 01:26, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes on the old kit appear to go up just slightly onto the haunch. -- 01:28, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded --<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 18:23, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:42, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rose (FQ) (K) ~ For Approval
Hope I can get this done in time to reserve Whitewing! Moo (talk) 08:49, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. -- 15:24, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Please reupload under File:Rose (FQ).kit.png. ​​​​​​​​

Reuploaded Is this a bit better? Moo (talk) 20:44, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Still feel as if it can be smoothed on the cream a bit. Shading could also be defined on the brown, and could you soften the texture a bit to match the kittypet? -- 23:59, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Also add some shading to the collar to make it look less flat

ReuploadedMoo (talk) 00:41, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the collar and smooth the shading on the cream a bit more. -- 00:45, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can you do me a redline of the collar? I've never drawn a collar on a kit before... Thanks! Moo (talk) 00:59, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Personally, I think the collar looks fine, just define the light be removing 2 pixels of shading as I told you before ^^^ -- 01:00, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded done! Moo (talk) 01:09, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

The cream seems more saturated than the kittypet and the earpink, too. I also think the brown on the face can be receded a bit. I think the brown on the top should be lowered to just above the eyes, and the brown on the side should be receded to the cheek. 02:04, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? Moo (talk) 02:46, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

the cream is still a littler lighter than whats on the kittypet; and the brown on the legs could be smudged a little to match the style of the kittypet too

Who made the kittypet? Im thinking a colourpick and direct side by side might need to be in order. Moo (talk) 09:57, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

The artist who made the kittypet, Axlotls are fudge, are blocked from this wiki. Try colorpicking from a very light spot in the kittypet. -- 12:21, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

I managed to snag the file from them on Discord. For the cream, it should be #c2a977, the cream texture should be #745a2e on low opacity, the brown is #4e3521, and the brown texture is #160d06 on low opacity. I hope this helps! -- 13:39, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the colour Moo (talk) 20:45, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a bit. 02:42, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rockfall (W) - CBA
Did he predict the future??? -- 13:17, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

there's a bit of waste at the tip of his ears. 18:57, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the tail shading some? 19:02, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 19:59, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:41, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Owlstar (SotC) (K) - For Approval
Last one before the SQH frenzy begins. -- 13:48, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Whats up with that Eye? Also whats the SQH Frenzy? Moo (talk) 21:50, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

The eye is intentional, he has huge eyes. Squirrelflight's Hope frenzy -- 22:01, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Ok thanks Moo (talk) 00:45, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

The linear art is too thick on the eye.

Reuploaded -- 22:36, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Pebble Heart (Alt K) - For Approval
16:53, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the stripes a bit? 18:55, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

They're the exact same as the that was approved a few days ago  20:02, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

This should match File:Pebbleheart.kit.alt.png. ​​​​

The colors are picked from it, I was aware it existed. But I guess I'll have to match it a little better 04:16, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Rosetail (W) - For Approval
19:16, August 25, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Her tail needs to be bushy. -- 19:17, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

Petalnose (W Alt) - For Evaluation
19:48, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened and smoothed out lots. -- 19:51, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. should i darken it a tad? 20:02, August 25, 2019 (UTC)'''

Don't darken it, but define the shading depth. Add a thinner layer of dark shading to the sides of the lineart, and make it just as smooth. Curve the shading on the haunch more, and smudge the white on the face quite a lot. -- 20:04, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 21:19, August 25, 2019 (UTC)'''

Still think the shading looks flat. By sides of the lineart, I mean one side only (the right side of the where the shading touches the lineart in this case. -- 21:28, August 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. better? 03:29, August 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

Yes. Still think the shading should be smoothed though. -- 03:33, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 16:48, August 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

'''reuploaded, again. there was a whole bunch of waste. 16:53, August 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

Hmm, the shading looks fine on the tail now. However, I feel the main shading on the body, legs and face should be smoothed out a bit, and the depth layer is overblurred, which still makes the shading look flat. -- 22:37, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 02:54, August 27, 2019 (UTC) '''

Smooth out the haunch shading. Also i got a redline yay. Blue is where there is leaking shading/place some shading in those areas (including inside the <-- ear); red is where the shading is overblurred/remove shading in those areas; and green is where I think I see some blurred lineart in the ear pink but i'm not too sure. This is very good! 03:07, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:44, August 27, 2019 (UTC)'''

Ryestalk (K) ~ For Approval
idk i think she's neat 16:34, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Ryestalk (W) ~ For Approval


ye she's neat 16:34, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (TC) (W) - For Evaluation
— Imp uri ti  e s   ★  19:41, August 26, 2019 (UTC) There is some waster at the bottom of the tail where it twists --Moo (talk) 19:53, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

oops re-uploaded  — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  19:54, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture. The og warrior does not have any. The ear pink also looks brighter too on the other image. The shading on the haunch can also be smoothed and curved more (see something like this or this for examples on that curve). 20:01, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  20:33, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! Could you define the shading depth a bit? That's just adding a thinner, darker layer of shading. Also, add some shading to the back paw (it would be entirely in shadow with this source). -- 22:38, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  23:37, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

The back paw farthest from us should have shading. Shading is also leaking away from the lineart on the legs. -- 23:42, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  23:46, August 26, 2019 (UTC)

What happened to the back paw? It doesn't appear to be filled in anymore. -- 01:01, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

can you send me a screenshot of which you're referring to ? to me it looks like the shading completely covers it. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  02:19, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded, fixed some of the shading again. — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  02:58, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

I gotcha. Here's a redline for a bunch of stuff. Potato's referring to the back leg furthest from us (see in red). Green is leaking shading (so fill that in); pink is where I would add shading; blue is where the shading is too overblurred/flat so erase the shading there. 03:00, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

aa thank you-- hadn't realized that was a back leg oop- anyway, re-uploaded — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  03:09, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Change "For Evaluation" to "For Approval.  05:15, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Pigeonfoot (K) ~ For Approval
oof 02:54, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (K) ~ For Approval
apparently this dude was apprenticed early and that's pretty cool i guess 02:54, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

there's tiny  white pixel on the <--- of the back leg closest to us. 05:18, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Dawncloud (K) - For Approval
Uhh <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  03:58, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! Add shading to the chin and the ear. 04:47, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  ''<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,papayawhip);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">me  09:15, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) - For Approval
this honestly looks horrid and im half asleep but i tried — Imp uri ti  e s   ★  04:02, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

Change the "For Approval" to "For Evaluation". 04:46, August 27, 2019 (UTC)

It can stay at “For Approval”, I’ll go promote them. this is more than enough to be promoted.