Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Minty (Ro) ~ Tweaked
My first tweak :3 OA was Icestorm123 and the shading needed to be blurred. 13:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I had reserved this, but I don't want to take away your glory ;3 I'll be happy to give it to you ;D Blur the shading a bit still. 05:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

facepalm* I'm sorry! Anyways, '''Re-Uploaded. ''' 14:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail tip. 14:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 15:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks like she has a gray tail tip, and not a highlight.. Can you fix that? 15:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. 20:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:23, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes lighter and brighter, and redden the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:27, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to me like it's only on the outside of the image and in. Lighten the back, darken the neck, lighten some of the legs and tail, and shade behind the shoulders. Breeze whisker  15:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. I re-did the tail shading because it was giving me a headache. :P 18:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and lighten all the shading. 01:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, including the eyes, so it matches the queen. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for a better idea of what the shading placement should look like, and blur all the shading. 22:39 Sun Jan 1

Re-Uploaded. I re-did her. 19:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the earpink. 19:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bunch. 01:43 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. 21:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job! But can you fix the tail highlight? It still looks as if she was a gray tipped tail. Also, make her nose darker. 21:14, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:07, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten and bright the eyes a lot? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:38, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 16:31, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Looks great! 04:00, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:18, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 23:55 Mon Jan 9

Blackstar (Ro) Redone
I got permission for Iceheart to redo him instead of making it a tweak. His pelt colored bothered me; I felt it was too close to white. First redo as a warrior (Not on the list yet, but I've had 4 chararts approved) 12:27, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

AGIN! Its rogue, no rougue! ,13:51,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Leaf, chill, its just a typo, it can be fixed. Lighten the shading a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Chill Leafstorm, and spell correctly if you're going to correct. Shouldn't the black go up farther on his legs to match his leader? Breeze whisker  16:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just reread that. I didn't mean to sound so rude. Sorry Leaf. ^^; Breeze  whisker  16:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. 17:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love Blackstar! The back black paws should be a little more black. 17:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, if they're any darker than you won't be able to see the lineart 17:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant raise to black up or something xD Blur the earpink alittle bit - 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah sorry. I meant to raise it up so it's level with the front. 17:42, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot the back black paws. 20:51, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black and enlarge the earpink. 20:53, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more - 20:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And blur said shafing. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the black in the ears. 22:41 Sun Jan 1

Blur and lighten the shading more - 00:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white into the black on the ears. 03:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the paws and blur them 00:46, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink larger and add eye color. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 01:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
She needed to be redone to match others she was on the list. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 03:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the unshaded bits brighter, they sorta look shiny on the other images. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 03:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda greenish. Make her a little more orange. 03:33, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:10, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and define the earpink. 20:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:51, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the image a tad and add highlights so it matches the other images. 05:49 Sat Jan 7

Also, lighten the whole image just a tad. 03:57, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:02, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add/brighten highlights so this looks shinier (like the other images) 02:02 Tue Jan 10

Coal (Ro) ~ Redone
Yay! My first tweaked charart! Just to tell you, I use highlights and right now they're blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

OA and why did it have to be redone? 23:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the whole thing, I can't see the lineart 23:53, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the redo list and OA is Blackclaw09. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  23:58, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink. 00:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

His ears are facing <---that way though. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  00:39, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but they should still be centered. That's the placement. 00:47, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

But, the earpink placement for Shadepelt's elder would have to be centered, then. I think it's fine. 00:49, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If is ear-pink facing ←← this way, i think you should add it on the second ear too. ,18:25,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   2012! The end of the world?  14:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pelt more, and maybe enlarge the highlights 06:36, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (K) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images, OA was Sandwich989. Comments? I'm not changing any colors; they're from her apprentice image. 01:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  01:26, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I thought we were allowed to do dark shading?...Many images have a lot darker shading, but I'll just turn down the contrast a bit.Re-Uploaded. 01:29, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Rawr. I wanted to do her 3: Cute! Blur the earpink on <--- this side. 01:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the unshaded bits more bright and silvery, and the stripes darkerr. Sky- Lather. Rinse. Obey. 22:30, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Remember, colors come from her apprentice image. 22:54, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Milkfur (WC) (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be done as shorthaired. OA was Moonflight, comments? 08:27, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some haunch shading, and blur alot. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 09:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that light parts alot ,18:20,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it. <span style="">20:07 Thu Jan 5

It looks like there is blurred lineart on the haunch. 20:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You know you didn't actually have to redo it? You can just layer the shorthaired lineart over the original version. See the tutorial if you don't know how. 22:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and there's some missing lineart on the front paw and a few other places. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad more. 03:44, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Gorsetail (P3) (W) ~ Redone
Okay, it was on the redo list because the patches need to be lighter and shading needs to be redone. OA= Flamingomom3 with a redo/tweak by Moonleaf. Comments? 00:07, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the patches on her front legs and hind foot closest to us darker. It was only a tweak. 00:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Tone done zee highlights please. <span style="">00:01 Tue Jan 10

Smoketalon (W) - Tweaked
Since I realized I can't put up Brackenfur, I decided to do Smoketalon, instead. This is actually tweaked. Comments? 00:53, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

The space in between his legs is filled. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 00:58, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tend to forget that area. 01:00, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give him a pupil? Looks like he doesn't have one.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:18, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, he does have a pupil. The eye deosnt matter. Anywho, define/darken the shading more 23:19, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:43, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (W) - Redone
Discussion about this being redone is on the talk page. I didn't know when Ivy was gonna post hers, and I already finished mine, so I went ahead and posted it. Since Ivy reserved before me, I'd be happy to change it to match hers if she wants. OA was Ashshadow, then redone by Ivy. Comments? No drama on here, go to the talk page if you think he should get redone. 4 SW agree on it, so we're going ahead for now, but if you disagree, don't bring it up here. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:02, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Might just be me, but the shading on the legs makes it look like he has darker legs, sorta like Brackenfoot. Lighten it up a tad? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:05, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Gorgeous! I still think he should be a closer color to this guy, but yours could be fine as well. 03:13, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

As pretty as this is (and it's gorgeous) I agree with Shelly :3 <span style="">05:35 Fri Jan 6

I tried color-picking from that image, and a few others of the same shade. It's not really accurate. He has a 'Flame Colored Pelt" and that nowhere near flame colored. I searched bright ginger cats and I found on that look flamey and color picked from that and ended up with this. It's accurate, but I did make a version from the ref you gave me and can upload it if you want but really it's more golden/pale ginger. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:07, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Shelly too, perhaps just saturate the image a tad. <span style="">01:31, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Reuploaded - Despite this being a natural ginger color, it really doesn't fit his "Flame Colored" description, but since everyone seems to agree. *shrugs* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:58, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

He just has a pale belly, not chest and muzzle too 05:44, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I thought we decided it was the artist's choice whether to give them a pale muzzle/chest/belly on tabbies? And it had a pale chest on his old image.... I can remove the muzzle if needed though. I just thought we decided it was the artist's choice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:03, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

*shrug* I don't know, maybe it was. But I think you could at least make the stripes and the pale belly/chest/muzzle alot more fainter since I think we're really exaggerating his description. Alot of warriors fans would just think his description would be just a ginger pelt. No stripes. No pales belly or chest. But you don't have to do what I said. I'm just saying what I think 19:20, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

How are we exaggerating his description? He's described with a pale belly and shown with stripes on every single book cover he's been on except CotC. I'm gonna leave it like this, sorry Bloo. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:46, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W)~ Redone
Need to match other images and OA was Feircestar. I basically just put the warrior lineart over the deputy image and add a few small tweaks. 21:39, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the earpink looking see-through? Maybe define it a tad and blur around the edges. Also maybe make it smaller. Feel free to disagree. <span style="">01:49, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Since this is legitamatly the exact same ear pink as the deputy and that got approved, i think its fine. 05:04, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's a stripe that can be seen under the ear pink. I dunno. Correct me if I'm wrong. 15:53, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it too. :X <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 06:44, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

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That's what I ment. <span style="">02:48, Tue, Jan, 10, 2012

Reuplaoded- Mkay wasnt an issue on the deputy image but i guess i fix it on this one. 04:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Little Mew (Ki) - Tweak
Needed to be short haired. OA - was Dawnfeather/Sandstar with a redo, it looks like by Shelly. Comments? 05:43, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Crapp~ I fail. I'll get the lineart on the back paw. 05:46, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:48, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:41, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:52, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lizardstripe(Q) - Redone
Well, she is on the list, her shadings are blotchy, stripes too...she needs really redone..OA is Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire :-) Arrg that stripes are confusing xD I was trying the new way of tabbies but everything wasnt looking good on her o_O ,10:13,January 7,2012 (UTC)

'Cause she's a heartless evil little cat that Brokenstar hopefully killed. Darken the ear-pink a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:57, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

No, she died for greencought, nevermind... Reuploaded ,19:18,January 7,2012 (UTC)

Define the edges of the white 05:17, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ruploaded ,11:28,January 8,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad more visible and slightly less purply? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 04:03, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded *dont kill me* ,17:39,January 9,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller 02:38, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Its not needed ,20:07,January 10,2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a bit? It looks like a field of wheat is printed onto her pelt. 20:11, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe she found some and made her nest from it xD Ahh reuploaded ,20:30,January 10,2012 (UTC)

Firestar (KP) ~ Redone
I had time to put him up! 8D Anyways, OA was Night Shine, with major tweaks by Ivystripe, comments for improvement? 02:29, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Not major tweaks by me, it was redone by me. Sorry it's just a little irritating for me 03:01, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I should have realized. XD Sorry. 03:10, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think (since we're going by Paleh's design) you should ask Paleh to send you her .xcf file so the colours completely match. Sound okay to you? <span style="">05:14 Sun Jan 8

Kinkfur (Q) - Redone
OA was Flamingmom, I think. Redone to match her warrior. Comments? 04:00, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

She really needs a hairbrush. o3o Darken the shading a little. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 05:53, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:24, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I love this ♥ I think the earpink needs a little more blurring. 20:47, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink is fine. <span style="">00:05 Tue Jan 10

Firestar (L) - Redone
Many OAs for this: Bramble, Night Shine, Squirrelflight, Rainlegs, and a redo by Icestorm123. I had had a different design for Firestr, but Paleh uploaded hers first and it's not fair to make everyone doing one of his images completly throw away their hard work. 05:12, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think (since we're going by Paleh's design) you should ask Paleh to send you her .xcf file so the colours completely match. Sound okay to you? <span style="">05:13 Sun Jan 8

Well you reserved first Ivy, so I personally think you should pic. I just didn't want to wait for you to post since I didn't know how long it'd be. But if we do keep this design, yes, I'd be happy to send you the .xcf file. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:00, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'd say go by what the user on the talk page said. Make him look less like a dark ginger cat and lighten the stripes a bit. You could still go by the image I cited. Or you could even go ahead and make him the same color as Squirrelflight. 02:51, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Songbird (Q) ~ Redone
Redone because it was blotchy, tinted green, and the tabby pattern was unrealistic. OA=Icestorm123, later redone by Dappleclaw, then tweaked a bit by Dappleclaw and Nightshine. (I think) 16:55, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the unshaded parts a bit. (Might just be me though) <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 21:17, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

... okay. Smudge the stripes to be less solid. 22:49, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudges the white some more. Define the shading 23:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the brown up too, seeing as she's a light brown tabby. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:43, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

And if you want the tabby pattern to be realistic as you said, ditch the triangles. 02:46, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar (Le) ~ Redone
Well, the discussion to redo Bluestar pointed to yes, and since Mistystar looks exactly like her mother I redid her. (suddenly realizes that I probably should have gone for a paler grey) ... Kay. ^^; Anyway, how I figured I'd do it is by picking the grey of a picture of a Russian Blue cat and giving it blue tinted highlights. Comments? 14:28, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

OA was Mousetalon, with tweaks/redos by Nightflower, Mintstarr, and Icestorm. 14:31, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with what Ivy said on the talk page, so any chance of you color picking from one of Bluestar's official images? Also, blur the shading and make the nose the same color as the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:42, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

It is, I just added extra shading to the inner ears. And sure, I'll pick off of Bluestar's image. But not the highlighted parts. They'd still be too blue. I think adding blue highlights is still the way to go. 18:50, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Kay, I copied the colors from the image Ivy provided, and this is what I got. It's not much more realistic than the old one, and frankly I don't trust Cats of the Clans much, seeing as most of the images in it are wrong in one way or another. Can I please go back to using the color I got off of an image of an actual grey-blue cat and not a painted one? 19:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'd go with the real one, but make it slightly more blue, seeing as there wouldn't be much difference between this and the alt. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 19:39, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

There, now she isn't nearly primary blue. Again, she's a real blue-grey color picked from a Russian Blue cat, and I gave her blue highlights since the blue stands out in the light. 21:45, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

And I think that the alt needs to be basic grey instead of light grey as it is at the moment. 22:04, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

She looks blue-grey to me now. ^^ Blur the shading a smudge. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 23:44, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

This is a perfect blue-grey. Don't change it. But do add a little more shading to the face or define it. Breeze whisker  00:38, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm trally proud of this one. :3 19:51, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt.Ki) - Redone
Why it isnt done yet? :-) Ok I didnt made anything big aroud it, yust a small copy of kit with broken jaw o.O Oa is Scarletwing. If youre going to kill me make it fast and silently please..no one has reserved it yet. ,17:48,January 9,2012 (UTC)

Scarletwing? xD Nice job. Make this earpink > a little bigger, and it looks a little darker. 00:28, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

OOOO LOOOL I MADE A MISTAKE *M*. o.O Reuploaded ,20:10,January 10,2012 (UTC)

Echosong (MC) ~ Redone
The stripes needed to be fixed, just decided to redo it. I tried a new way of doing tabbies. OA was Ivypool but I don't think that one counts so it's Bramble and was later redone by Frostheart. Comments? 00:31, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think unless it's on the redo list you need permission... 00:34, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Oh I don't know. Scarlet said on my talk page that she doesn't care what gets redone. I thought it alpied to all tweaks. But someone can decline this if it's against the rules. 00:43, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

But, just in case, I give her permission here and now. Mountainheart knows how to use good judgement, and just tweaking a stripe pattern is very difficult. 01:23, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Well technically we decided that you do need to get permission before you redo, or else it gets declined so...... :/ But you could probably go ask then keep this up. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:34, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, Echosong's on the redo list. That means that Mountainheart didn't need to go to anyone, if I remember correctly. 01:39, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the tweak list but the stripes were hard to work with. That's why I redid it. I don't want to cause an arguement because of this. 01:50, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) - Redone
Before anyone says anything, he was on the redo list. His shading was blotchy and his stripes needed to be redone. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 01:47, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

You stole my spot. >:( Anyways, darken the shading. <span style="">01:57, Tue, Jan, 10, 2012

Reuploaded 02:01, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think he should be more brown. Right now his colour looks similar to Squirrelfur's. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 02:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and stripes on the tail 02:36, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:54, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh, I like. Make him a little less ginger and enlarge and define the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:06, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more stripes on the unstriped parts of the body. 20:25, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Dawncloud (W) - Redone
To match the others. Also blotchy shading ._. blotchy shading angers Wildy. <span style="">02:08 Tue Jan 10

Quietstep was the OA :P <span style="">02:09 Tue Jan 10

Wildy rage is bad, only if Wildy is raging on ME. define the tail shading 02:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Q)- tweaked
Made her more brown, less green, fixed miscolored pixels, and filled in nose. Not much a difference really. Oa= Darkhallows 02:32, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should make her lighter. She looks dark brown, instead of just brown. 02:39, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, Im not so sure about that. Maybe not 02:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think this shade is fine. Can make the earpink a tad bigger? 02:55, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded 03:08, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit and make the back leg less ginger? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Same with the front paw furtherest from us. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 21:49, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Ki) - Tweaked
First tweak/redo as a warrior! Shading and earpink needed to blurred and there was some smudged lineart so I fixed that hopefully. OA was *Ivypool*, I'm pretty sure, as that's what it says in the file history. <span style="">02:44, Tue, Jan, 10, 2012

Blur the shading a little more. =3 02:46, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make her nose gray? ;) 02:54, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Redscar (MC) ~ Redone
Been waiting a while for a medicine cat to go on the redo list. :3 Trying to get every rank. By the way, I'm fine with anyone that wants to redoing Mistystar's images to match mine up there. You guys are warriors and up. You can copy my solid colored cat. 21:24, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Quince (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Ashshadow and the shading needed to be blurred. 21:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)