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Littlecloud(mc alt 2)~for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​​​​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to the alt mentioned above by Echo, this would have to be renamed File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. Mind fixing that real quick Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^

17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The darker stripes on the face should be thinner, and all of the stripes should be more jagged^^ There's also a slight layer of texture going underneath them, on the mca ~

Define your light source. Its pretty hard to distinguish it. If you need help with it, you may find the Apprentice Tutorials helpful. 16:43 Sun Dec 30

Still working? 00:05, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

If you are still working, there's this area outside the right hind leg that shouldn't be filled in. I'll send you a screenshot later when I have time to get on the computer.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:26, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go!Potato Flakin (talk) 04:24, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, sorry for the break, I just had thingd going on, and life, but I got it up! : )Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:57, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, that shading tho! I dont know what I was doing, but I fixed the shadingIm Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yes, much better. There are some things that still need to be addressed, but take your time. The stripes need to be smudged and sharpened a bit more. I would recommend you take the colors of his apprentice, or medicine cat apprentice. The earpink is much lighter on the other images, and the two stripes on the face are blotchy. Seperate them so they are two stripes, then smooth and sharpen them to match the kit. Whiten the white, and define the shading (have you tried tinting your shading? It's magic) This is very good Owlbite, you are doing well.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I sort-of like it.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite! Whiten the white on the legs, thin out the face stripes, and define the shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:12, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, face stripes cant get any thiner. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:26, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I understand. Where's your lightsouce here? If there is one please define it. Potato Flakin (talk) 04:29, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading too? I can't tell where the light source is either, but I think that may just be because I can't make out where a lot of the shading is. 13:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC) I will definitely the light, but look at the light in the eyes.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 16:38, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't have white markings or pale around the earpink^

Lighten the earpink a little more, and remember, don't stress, the lightsource and other things are and easy fix, take your time.=)Potato Flakin (talk) 01:36, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

spooky, look at the offical art, look, there is white marks. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:59, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I cut the white down, but it is there on the offical art, and if I define the shading, it will make it look... just... bad. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:06, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I’m quite sure it’s supposed to be that pale color around the ears. I matched the same image you’re matching to when I did the other images in this alt set

Re-up, okay.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 03:03, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Owlbite, don't kill me, but I'm still very confused about your lightsource. I cannot see where the shading is.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:30, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that help? I removed some shading from the direct place of the light sorce, wich needed to be fixed anyways.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:00, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the shading darker? i think it'll make it more visible. that pattern is looking good 11:44, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, yeet.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:41, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png not Littlecoud -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:38, 1/09/2019 ]

Actually, it's not fully wrong. There's just a duplicate of File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png that's spelled wrong. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:40, 1/09/2019 ]

Define shading every but the paws. Define light on the paws. It's coming along! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:55, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, sorry about my splng!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:56, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry if it's a bother, but the paws' light could still be defined greatly. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 23:00, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I tryed, let me know if it needs more.<font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:10, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Pose is from a reference, I can show it if need be. <span style="">20:10 Wed Jan 2

Sun these are absolutely astounding! Could you add either a tag or bell to the collar? There’s usually one. :) 20:16, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

Soooo cute! Can you move the collar a little bit down the neck? It kinda looks like it's choking them right now.. ^^' Also, the forearm closest to us looks overly thick. 23:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

woah!! love everyhting on this charart, i cant wait to see the next one. Starclanwilldarkme2 (talk) 00:16, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing, Sun! Could you possibly make that <-- front leg a bit longer to match the length of the other? It seems a bit shorter. 03:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the lineart on the hind paws just a bit? 03:56, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

The front paw facing us feels a bit too chubby compared to the rest of the legs. Also, while I do understand what you're going for with the lil fatty fluff on the haunch to define the tummy, it looks a bit off. Plump cats don't really have their fat protruding past their haunch, and with them laying down like this, the fat would go lower to touch the ground bc of gravity. These are super cute ;; I adore the toe beans so so much!! —

Could be my personal preferences, but could you make the long haired's fur less.. spiky and give it more variation?

Hi Sun! You don’t have a limit like other art and take the time you need, but I just wanted to confirm that you’re still working? :) 17:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I am! I'm just trying to enjoy my last week of break before the semester! I'll upload soon! <span style="">18:46 Tue Jan 8

Tribe of Endless Hunting Blanks ~ For Approval
Alrighty, I'm all freshened up and ready for these. ^^ 21:53, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Do you think you can enlarge it? 21:54, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, I forgot to mention I was planning on doing that. ^^' 21:56, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reups How's this size wise? 03:25, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Great! Do you think you could add a mouth? 04:44, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you possibly make the fur taper out a little bit more on the long haired blank, specifically talking about the 3 hairs on the cheeks. Also idk if its just me, but I feel like the front leg in the back is visibly thinner than the front front leg 05:09, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

I love these. Can you give the short-hair a cheek, since the long-hair already has one? :D 18:34, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 20:03, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Back at it again with some redlines for you-- —​​​​​

Reups Thanks! Much appreciated. 02:35, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Push the neck forward a bit. Right now the cat would be straining its neck very hard. Also shrink the length of the leg on the ground, it's too big.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:07, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the neck is fine. It doesn't look like the cat is straining since it's just looking up. 15:29, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

The short-haired far front leg looks a bit too chubby at the bottom. try making the paw angle more.. sharp?

15:32, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

The neck is fine. My own cats have strained their neck far worse than this LOL —​​​

Reups 21:31, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

They are really coming along! The short-hair's chest looks a bit pointy. xD 03:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reups lol 17:45, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

can you maybe add some fluff to the neck? also the front leg thats furtherest away from us looks a bit too thick. (it's especially prominent on the shorthair.) love how they're looking like they're about to jump at a fly tho LUL 18:34, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm maybe do the same thing you’d done to the shorthaired’s chest to the long one in terms of general shape - it seems a little more pointy/angled than the other. I also think the shorthaired haunch is a little big, it hits the same points the long one does, but it shouldn’t go as far because the long one has fur making it go out further

Reups Like this? 03:33, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

The leg and the chest should be connected on the longhair. —​​​​

while theres a comment here ill just point out that theres a white spot between the legs that on the short hair blank should be transparent. love these blanks, btw 11:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

or i guess looking at it, it might be the back leg. jsut thought id point it out– if its intentional ignore my previous comment 11:58, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

The foreleg furthest from us looks.. odd. Im no anatomy expert but it seems too.. thick and straight. I don't know if that made sense but eh. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:26, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Yeah, I'm honestly not sure what to do with that leg. I'm on the struggle bus with that one I'm afraid. And, Burntclaw, yeah I was kinda thinking that would be part of the hind leg. 01:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

https://prnt.sc/m4p2jm I tried to redline, but I'm no anatomy expert so if someone else can do better please do. :') <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:40, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Don't kill me but the longhair looks slightly taller than the shorthair? -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 11:09, 1/09/2019 ]

I feel that has more to do with the long-haired blank's dimensions and whatnot. They look the same size to me. ​

Reups Yeah, Jayce is right. I made sure they're both the same size, but the floofy tail on the long-haired adds more height. 18:30, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Rain (TB) ~ For Approval
喔你們好

Nice. Smooth out the belly shading a bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:19, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I really love this!!! But, I am a bit confused on the light source here. It seems to be coming from an angle behind and above the cat, but the tail shading does not correlate with the rest of the shading in that case. 02:58, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail Malina457 (talk) 04:13, January 7, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Purdy design! There's waste between the hind legs. 03:27, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

There's a weird light brown line next to the haunch.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:32, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think that's part of the mud spots, Potato. ​​​​

嗨！ 我很好！The gray looks like... darkened white, not... gray, is that just the shading?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:56, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

What...? Star has the choice to use whatever colors or speckle pattern she wants, and I'm not seeing a "darkened white" here? Even if it would be, as long as it's gray, it's fair for her to use. ​

Squirrelflight (A Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I know the shading on the haunch needs fixed so please don't comment on it. 14:19, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

White looks a little cream.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:37, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. Well, the official image does have it kinda cream, not really white, though it could be lightened a tad it'd still be cream. Also think you could recede it on the tail a tiny bit, doesn't seem to go as far down what it's supposed to match

I'd rather not change the colors as they were colorpicked directly off the image. Yeah, i thought there was too much on the tail, ill fix that as soon as I can. 00:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the shading depth/expand the shading on the shoulder and back? 03:26, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out all of the shading? I know you said not to comment on certain aspects, but I feel the entire image could use some smoothing out, in addition to Vec's comment. ​​​​​

can you blend the tail bit in more?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:19, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

What do you mean blend it a bit more? 10:48, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe Owlbite meant about blurring the shading on the tail. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 12:10, 1/09/2019 ]

I think Owlbite meant for Mink to smudge the cream tail-tip into the pelt, but it looks smudged enough to me. Silver may be right too.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:11, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

no, I ment to make more of a transition from the brown to the white. <font color="#ffffff"> <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:14, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Flametail (Alt. Star) ~ For Approval
Tried to match the medicine cat, hope it's not too far off! Eggheart (talk) 03:14, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's not, actually! Just gotta remember to add the texture, since his MC does have it. ​​​​

I really like the eyes! :D Maybe thicken the stripes just a bit to match? 03:23, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the body shading. This is lovely Eggheart!Potato Flakin (talk) 03:34, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Eggheart (talk) 03:36, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly this is very good, and you clearly know what you're doing. I'll promote you into an apprentice promptly.

There's meant to be a dorsal stripe on this set, could you add that? You can't really see very much of it, but the spine definitely has a stripe. ​

Add a little tad of shading on the face goignout to the chin; looks a tad flat there

not sure if it was intentional or not but theres a little bit of black leaking from the (our perspective) right eye. if thats shading, expand it and make it look smoother or if not I guess... erase it 11:56, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Rabbittail (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Another short-hair. Tried to match with the tunneler? I'm gonna try to get this up before the blank is redone. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 08:05, 1/08/2019 ]

Smooth out the shading, please. ​​​​​

Reups -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:50, 1/08/2019 ]

define shading on the back legs and lighten it on the "front front" leg (lol) 11:47, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'd say lighten the shading a little bit overall. 13:29, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reups -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 08:50, 1/09/2019 ]

Lighten the shading on the front leg closest to us a bit more, if you would

Smooth out the earpink a bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:12, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt App 2) - For Approval
It's.... interesting, to say the least. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:59, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink? —​​​​​

A good effort, Dark! However, on the picture, i'm picking up small hints of white around the hindlegs, so there's likely a bit of white along the belly, she should have more stripes, the pale should be softer, there isn't any earpink at all as far as I can tell, and she has some brown in her pelt. If the brown is there, sharpen/define it because it sho7uld be fairly visible. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:18, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

A lot of earpink is leaking onto the head, I can't see any earpink in <-- this ear, and the stripes need to be sharpened. And her back looks blue..?Potato Flakin (talk) 01:32, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

In addition to adding more stripes like Squid said, I think extending the ones on the haunch all the way would help it match better. 01:40, January 9, 2019 (UTC)\

can you blur/smudge the stripes?<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:12, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Pretty sure this needs to be short-furred, as that's how it is in the image. 02:35, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Some golden needs to be added to as you can clearly see it on the official image. The stripes should also be thinner and add some more. There doesn't seem to be a dorsal stripe either. This is really good though! Also could you possibly lessen the the chest white, there seems to be less on the image. 10:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Apprentice Alt 2) ~ For Evaluation
I'm absolutely proud :) All colours from the alt star. Comments? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

You should be proud! Define the shading on the tail and paws? 18:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shading a little on the shoulder back and haunch, add some to the forelegs and hindlegs farthest from us and soften the stripes, maybe add a handful more if you're able. This is very good! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:47, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the stripes some too? 18:51, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Screams bc I keep forgetting to mention things. Sharpen the gold on the shoulder and foreleg a little, and there's waste between the whiskers. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Is it better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

<-- this hind leg needs more white, there's a lot on the warrior alt. Also friendly reminder to upload under File:Feathertail.apprentice.alt2.png. It was misspelled earlier (it's fixed now)Potato Flakin (talk) 23:15, January 9, 2019 (UTC)