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Bluestar (Alt. Apprentice) ~ For Approval
Tell me if it needs the nick!

There's waste by the head area. It needs the nick, since it's the alt image, and it has the nick anyway. Also, you need silver on the tail-tip and muzzle, as it has to match the other images. ~ Stormsong Let it storm&#9835;  22:36, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reups!: Better?

If this is the one for TUG then it shouldn't have the nick, as she's shown without it...

Darken and define the shading 08:52, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

I'll fix the shading, but please make up you're mind about the nick

No, she doesn't get the nick. Please remove it. 12:18, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ok, I have to redo her do...

No you don't, just overlay the linear art over the old one, on a new layer. then fill in the gaps 22:33, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

I lost the file I what I mean...

Withdrawing lel, I cant do her right...

I'll take over. 21:01, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The colors are all from the queen alt. 21:17, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 02:28, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:34, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, please.

Reuploaded. 14:43, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Theres like a line of shadow from her back butt to her middle of her thigh? Idk if you were doing that on purpose but it kind of looks weird... Also add a bit more shading in between her belly and legs Storm  &#9835;  13:02, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:02, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. 12:20, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:30, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading 09:13, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:11, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Put more shading in between the belly and the foreleg right by the elbow/bend in her leg. Storm &#9835;  22:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes (Ro) - CBA
Yay, it's my birthday! :D I honestly think he could be darkened if he is dark grey. 07:59, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Happy birthday, Burnt!! =) This is a lovely image. Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit, though?

Re-upped thank you =P 08:20, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Happy birthday! Hope you have a great day. Anyway, smudge/blur the tail shading a tiny bit, and possibly define the eye depth? 15:12, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks :) 04:23, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the eyes more orange- Amber like the kit? User: Dewdrops56/talk 14:00, May, 19, 2015

The eyes seem to me to be the same color as the kit's, so I think it's fine. 20:11, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed with Icebreeze. 09:06, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 03:03, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more- I can see the smudge marks on my phone. It's kinda hard to smudge on solid cats, since you can't get sloppier, like you can on tabbies. (or so said Shelly a very long time ago)

Re-upped I'd really not rather smudge them anymore, if that's okay. The whole point of smudged shading on solid cats is that the smudge marks are there, to create a furry affect. 08:08, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, that came out so wrong. I have no filter- I should really invest in one. I didn't actually mean your shading was sloppy or anything, I was quoting an old senior warrior and former staffer. Smudged shading is just harder for people like me on solid cats, so I kinda thought it was the same for others. It was also on my phone, and as I'm sure everyone with an apple iPod or iPhone product can agree with, it makes everything look ten times worse than it actually is, my apologies. I know what the smudged shading is there for, but I'm used to being told to smooth it out more, due to me apparently having splotchy shading.

Re-uploaded I fixed a couple of things I didn't like, smoothed it out just a little bit and defined the shape. btw I didn't really find that rude, I knew what you really meant about the sloppiness so yeah there was really no need to apologize :D 12:49, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

A stripe/block of shading seems to be on his "arm" :P I like this! >< 07:37, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Get approved you Owl ugh 08:04, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, let's try and CBA the Owl, shall we?

Berryheart (K) ~ For Approval
wee~ Probably won't be able to upload on weekdays but I /can/ update on Fridays. <: 14:23, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

It needs a white neck like the other images. And define the light on the legs, and tail Storm  &#9835;  14:25, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

oh god it's disgusting ;;  14:33, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, tail, and the chest please you forgot those Storm  &#9835;  14:41, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

it's still horrible  14:57, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

There's literally still no light on the legs/paws. get rid of some shadow Storm  &#9835;  15:02, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Shrink the white on her front paws, please. They only look that way on the queen because of how long her legs are.

'''Better? ''' 15:26, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define and add depth to the shading? The image is looking kind of flat. Good job on this though! 15:35, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Ice, when you say "The image looks flat", you mean define the shading everywhere, right? Because I think that needs a bit more work upon touching :) Good job with smudging. Very nice. 18:36, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I hate shading ;_;  19:11, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

You are still forgetting to put light on the legs. Define the light on the chest and tail and define the shading on the side of her face... This charart is literally all shading. Define the light everywhere. Storm &#9835;  22:37, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

The white is looking a little grey on my screen… maybe lighten it? Idk whether it is only my phone 06:56, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

It isn't just your screen, it's really gray, add some highlights? Are you using pure white? 11:48, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

I used pure white on her queen, which is the first image in the set, so you'll need to do the same.

She did use pure white, but it's literally all shading. Adding to my comment earlier, get rid of some shadow. Storm &#9835;  23:02, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Latte, check this out 12:00, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I'll remove shading, but I'll do it on Friday. Sorry. 21:59, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

well I got some time today so  22:34, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws and legs... Chest, head, and tail... Storm &#9835;  04:28, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

imo it's fine, but if it's not, idek how to define it .-. 21:25, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

No. I agree with Storm. Erase some of the shading on the chest/add highlights. 22:31, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Please don't start the "its fine" thing. .-. Storm  &#9835;  01:04, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Storm, chill. Leave the enforcing to the leads, please. Vibrant, we're not starting the "it's fine" thing. These images are put on the approval page to be commented on before they go on the character's page. These comments are said for a reason, and no one's images are perfect. Not mine, not any one of the other leads', not yours, not a random warrior, kit, apprentice, whatever rank. That's why this page is here. Your white looks extremely gray, and in order to match the queen image, which I made, you're going to need to brighten up the white, as it looks like her image is black-and-gray, instead of black-and-white.

Soften the transition between the white on the neck and black; it's a bit hard-edged 02:28, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

'''Better? '''Skye, can you send me an .xcf or .psd or whatever so I can match the colors. (no idc about my email or shiz unless it's spam) Send it to here: mintiimonster.blogclan@gmail.com 13:49, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

There's still no light on the legs. Storm &#9835;  13:51, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Fixed  14:44, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Ah, yes, I will gladly send you a file! She's on her way right now. =)

Define the shading/light on the legs. Storm &#9835;  22:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Ferntail (Ki) ~ For Approval
16:09, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading between the tummy and on the leg as well. Looking good Storm  &#9835;  16:13, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head, and the light on the back paw. Cutie! 17:19, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

It could be defined everywhere 08:33, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

The leg, tail, and paw shading is fine, tbh.

done there already was shading on the leg and tummy, Storm, so I defined it. 11:17, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe possibly darken the shading a few ticks? Storm &#9835;  03:28, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 09:54, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the side of the face? Storm &#9835;  13:45, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Jaywing (K) ~ For Approval
His name sounds too much like Jay's Wing. Me + texture = no 23:20, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a little dark to me. 00:24, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped He does to me, too. Hopefully this is better, but if it's not I'll gladly lighten it further. 00:59, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? And maybe get rid of that shadow to the left on the chest/neck as it shouldn't be there with your light source. Storm &#9835;  03:29, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 20:08, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks a little dark. Maybe lighten just a tad? User: Dewdrops56/talk 22:13, May, 21, 2015

Re-upped 00:49, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading 11:30, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 12:03, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the texture? It's hard for me to see, and with these blanks, that just makes it worse.

Re-upped 01:43, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, on these blanks stripes look like blobs. I like him! Smooth out the earpink a tad^^ Superior work Ice 07:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Bramble :) 12:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt K) ~ For Approval
okay. I misnamed the file by accident- ill rename it in the next upload. 00:21, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

No, please don't reupload with a different filename. It's more crap for me to delete. I'll rename it for you. Also, smooth out the shading. This would actually be kit.alt3 because she already has two other alts.

Smooth out the shading on the tail a bit and/or define it? Storm &#9835;  01:33, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Curlfeather (W) - For Approval
I tried??? I also color-picked from the kit.

I love this Snowy! Define the shading on the tail and the back leg closest to us? Storm &#9835;  01:22, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

May just be my screen but this looks slightly lighter than the kit, perhaps it's just the shading or something, so if you think it's all right, disregard me. Back leg shading looks fine though. Pretty! 01:29, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

You know I think it is just the shading. Just ignore my above comment. 01:32, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's just the shading- the kit's is darker, and mine is tinted a brown-ish color. Anyways, re-uploaded.

Holy crap the texture is so good >.> Define shading overall, love this^^ 11:55, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Don't worry about the kit being darker, the original warrior was darker so I darkened the kit to match, but I'm going to lighten it back up to match this one because I don't like the dark color. (And I can do that now that the original warrior was declined) 13:51, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Raven you're not allowed to tweak images even if its yours. Only warriors are allowed to. Storm &#9835;  14:14, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

The image hasn't been approved yet, so I can still make changes to it. -looks up- 15:14, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

My bad, thought it was approved already. As for the image Snowy, maybe darken the shading a bit? Storm &#9835;  15:16, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you blur/smudge the body shading just a bit? 18:56, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading 06:33, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Smooth out shading on the legs <3 00:59, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have so many different shading layers, that it took me a bit to find out which layer I needed to smooth out...lol

Ivypool (Alt. W) - For Approval
- she was called gray and white in Dovewing's Silence 01:27, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

gray and white is pretty much silver and white if you ask me, are you sure they weren't just briefly describing her without saying her as a tabby? I might be wrong though. I love the texture!^^ Maybe lighten the front leg shading, and define the source on her hind leg, pretty! 07:38, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Gray and silver are separate shades. 10:27, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Gray-and-white is not silver-and-white.

Define the light on the tail Storm  &#9835;  12:57, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded On her hind paw farthest from us, she does have a gray toe, so that may be the shadow you're seeing Bramble 21:57, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body. 06:59, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:01, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tiny bit? It might be my screen though. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:38, May 24, 2015 (UTC)


 * I think it's fine 02:01, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

It's blurred enough, but you might as well dull it down a bit. 08:05, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the light on the back legs 11:05, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure why the ear pink should be dulled down, Burnt. If she changes the coloring, you might not be able to see it, which would probably result in a never-ending circle of defining, dulling, changing the color, blurring, ect. This shade of ear pink has been used on various other cats before, and I rarely ever see anyone have an issue with it. Also, if you don't mind, Scar, could you define or expand the light on the legs? I'm having trouble seeing it, and the frontmost visible leg looks like it's almost all in shadow....unless that's intentionally done like that. If it is, go ahead and keep it as it is.

Re-uploaded I think I got what everyone said... On the heel of her left forepaw, so has some gray, so that could be the darker shadow you're seeing 02:22, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Hootwhisker (W) ~ For Evaluation


Ok I edited it. Looks MUCH better than the old one, the shading is much better,i added a pupil, i erased the waste, and i blurred the ears.

PoppyShine (talk) 04:23, May 21, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

Hey, it's gotta match Hootwhisker's apprentice if I recall correctly..-- Nachtide  The  Wikian   Squad 07:04, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

You misnamed it, it should be named Hootwhisker.warrior.png. Other than that, match his apprentice image as Nachtide said, smooth out the shading, clear the waste, blur the earpink and define light on the legs. 07:35, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Don't align your images. It messes up the page. There is also texture to match. Define and darken your shading. This should also be titled 'For Evaluation' instead of 'For Approval' since its your first image. Storm &#9835;  11:24, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

He also doesnt appear to have a pupil... Define eye depth as well Storm  &#9835;  12:53, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, since it looks like the redo nomination for the apprentice is going to pass, I'm not adding texture, so that's fine. But isn't this a bit smaller than the usual warrior blank? 14:39, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

It has the right size to me, but the lineart is covered on some parts. 15:00, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

It does seem to be covered in some places -are your other layers under the lineart? Also, there seems to be a random black dot between the ears. Can you either blur it if it's shading, or get rid of it? 20:23, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

I just realized "the random black dot" is a disconnected part of the lineart, so don't get rid of it. Can you expose the lineart though, like I said above? 20:22, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Don't align your images .-. He still needs a pupil. Blur the earpink a bit more as well as the shading Storm  &#9835;  01:08, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

How am i aligning them, it looks normal to me, the pupil and shading and earpink i get. PoppyShine (talk) 01:37, May 23, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine

When you post an image it should be File:Example.warrior.png what you are doing is File:Example.warrior.png|left which messes up the structure of the page. Storm &#9835;  01:40, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

The lineart seems to be covered still. Are you using layers? If so, make sure the lineart is above the other layers. If not, I highly suggest that you do - it would be a lot easier. Other than that, define the eye depth, I can't see any. 12:15, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

It still has a lot of waste around the image. Storm &#9835;  21:42, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Say you reuploaded it everything you reupload :P 00:57, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste above the ear. Also, I'm having trouble seeing the shading, perhaps define it a bit? My phone's real crappy, so again it might be just my screen 10:53, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I redid the apprentice - the base colour is 424242, and that's not texture - it's just how I did the shading. If you want to make similar shading, Poppy, I used a 1px brush and used fairly large circular smudging movements. Of course you don't have to if you don't want to, I believe. 14:40, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Snowsplash, I'm having trouble seeing shading as well. Darken and define it please. Also I still don't see a pupil in his eye. Define the depth of the eye as well. Storm &#9835;  22:50, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define/add shading to his right/our left ear and tail. And Snowsplash, I see the waste too, just above the left ear 03:25, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrowtail (W) ~ For Approval
He has no specific color, but he's shown in the list of characters needing art so... Yep. I love the name Sparrowtail yay :D I actually came up with it before 09:26, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

he has an image that needs ti be matched. its not that hard ti check his page. ._. 09:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Omg I'm so dumb I swear I clicked on his page multiple times but I didn't realize it I'll upload it very soon 10:14, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Ugh it doesn't match  12:45, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light/shading on the legs/paws? It looks wonderful silver! Storm &#9835;  12:52, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  12:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? He looks good! 18:44, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

define it on the legs, too. 18:51, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups just came back from China so I wasn't able to work on this sorry 10:49, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) ~ For Approval
I swear guys I wasn't trying to copy Berry's version but I was so in awe I couldn't resist. 23:53 Thu May 21

He's cool! but he does look like Berry's version Maybe smooth out the muzzle white, and kinda separate the tail fray and tail shading? It seems like they're right overlapping each other just to me. Nicely done Hawky!:) 07:26, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

They are overlapping...? What do you mean? 21:08 Fri May 22

i think what theyre trying to say is the shading ends right where the grey and white meet, making it look like its a block of shading instead of grey fur. 21:13, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body. 08:12, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Maplestar (Star Alt) - For Approval
She was described as orange in Cloudstar's Journey, and Squirrelflight got an alt for that. I'm really happy with how this turned out. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:52, May 23, 2015 (UTC)


 * Speechless and gapes* define the shading on the main body 03:11, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :D Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:16, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

She's purdy!! Thicken the shading just a touch more on the haunch 05:52, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:58, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear a little more pinkish? User: Dewdrops56/ talk 03:00, May, 25, 2015

The earpink looks fine to me. Maybe define the head shading a tad though? Idk if what I'm seeing is the fur color/stripes. . 10:58, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sleekpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
14:28, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Skt you've once again amazed me o.o If that's shading near the chest, blur it a tad. 13:07, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded 06:54, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
08:16, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Foxy you certainly love this blank lol  love her! Smooth out and perhaps lighten the facial shading a tad and sorta like smudge the tail markings more? It looks kinda like part of the shading and I hate explaining. I can smell randomness on my comments 09:19, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:55, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think the patches on her other alts are slightly yellower, might just be me. Maybe define the earpink a tid? Omg this is so gorgeous x.x 14:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (Apprentice) ~ For Approval
I tried shading without blurring or smudging 10:04, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

In that case, what did you use it looks incredible! 0.0 define shading on the toes, and light on the legs :) 10:09, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

The base looks a little too dark. Would you like the .psd Sziri? Storm &#9835;  14:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt W) ~ For Approval
I just stuck the deputy main body into this, and fixed up the legs and tail. 12:26, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Slightfoot (W) ~ For Approval
I think I can post this now… -☽Sunstream ✼   Quarter Quell Time!☾  16:40, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

No you can't. Someone else has this reserved now. Sorry to say Storm  &#9835;  17:13, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

...  Now my dreams are crushed further  My thing was put down because it had been one month, but I got to keep my reservation. Like always I waited one week to re-post but whatever. -☽Sunstream ✼  Quarter Quell Time!☾  18:53, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

One month is as long as one person can reserve it. Storm &#9835;  20:10, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

You can repost it after two weeks, Sun 22:46, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sloefur (Mc) ~ For Approval
One week? Hopefully I can pass '-' 19:06, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a tad. I can't really make it out without zooming really close. Storm &#9835;  22:54, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Bramble has an image to match, and the earpink matches the deputy image, so I don't think she needs to lighten the ear pink unless the other image is nominated for a tweak.

Podlight (K) ~ For Approval
I think I did et :3 Storm  &#9835;  21:12, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
Right, my turn to give it a crack. 22:39, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. Storm &#9835;  22:54, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I just lightened the shading cause I think it seemed too dark. 23:37, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

You still need to define the light on the tail. Storm &#9835;  23:43, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (ki) ~ for approval
i tried 00:46, May 26, 2015 (UTC)