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Stormcloud (Ki) - For Approval
First art... Any tips? --Wavetail (talk) 00:57, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You have to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png ​​​

The stripes on the tail are too overblurred, and there needs to be at least one more to match his images. Also define the shading. -- 01:02, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

How to reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png? Also, ok. Will work on it --Wavetail (talk) 01:04, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Rename the image in your program and upload over the link Jayce gave you. -- 01:07, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

My art program doesn’t let me name drawings --Wavetail (talk) 01:08, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

What art program are you using? Most people here use gimp I believe

01:10, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

An iPad program as I do not have a computer and are not allowed paid apps --Wavetail (talk) 01:12, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

You can reupload under File:Stormcloud.kit.png by going to the page, going to "file history" and clicking "upload a new version of this file". 04:42, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe it’s just me, but all Stormcloud images I see have only three stripes. --Wavetail (talk) 23:52, September 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wavetail (talk) 00:38, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images! Just a small reminder. That means keep the |left out of your image code. Smooth the shading 00:42, 9/28/2019

Reuploaded Smoothed the shading and put a little more on the eye. Hopefully it doesn’t look like the shading is absent --Wavetail (talk) 00:53, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading over all? 03:30, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me if it’s too dark, I will change it --Wavetail (talk) 04:12, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make it a little bit more dark, and smooth the shading on the haunch.  W i n d s o n g   (talk)   09:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink color and darken the stripes a tad. 17:08, September 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Welp I tried --Wavetail (talk) 00:40, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes on the body (not the tail). His images show they are just as smudged as the tail stripes. -- 00:42, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna take a while --Wavetail (talk) 00:58, September 29, 2019 (UTC)

Someone pls give me something to improve on I’m DYING without anything to work on --Wavetail (talk) 00:11, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

From what I've seen, you can ask for comments after 3-5 days have passed. As for the image, I think the stripe color is still too light and the tail stripes should be slightly thicker to cover more of the tail. -- 00:13, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this is better Potato --Wavetail (talk) 01:27, September 30, 2019 (UTC)

Hiiii Wavetail!! I love the stripes! Can you smudge the earpink?  Crystie  Can't help  loving  me  14:24, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I over smudged it :P --Wavetail (talk) 23:37, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, I think the earpink could be smudged more. -- 23:40, October 1, 2019 (UTC)

If it isn't already, add the earpink layer under the shading possible? At the moment it looks very flat compared to the area around it which is covered in shading

Could you darken the shading tint? it kinda blends a bit with the stripes at the moment. 15:13, October 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a tad? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:36, October 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smudge the earpink as in shading or earpink and fur? --Wavetail (talk) 01:39, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Stripes seem a touch too dark compared to the other images

Reuploaded Too light or too dark?--Wavetail (talk) 22:53, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Too dark, I'm pretty sure she said. Lighten and smooth out the shading and the earpink still seems too... neonish? 04:27, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Will do. Also, I meant if it is still too dark or if I made it too light --Wavetail (talk) 05:26, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Try the following hexcodes for colours; #828282 for the base colour, #575759 for the stripes, and maybe #703F42 for the earpink - those should help match a little more?

Smooth the shading on the cheek --Moo (talk) 07:15, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Recede the facial shading; it should not be touching the eye, but also curve around the neck and wrap around the jaw, like on Jayclaw's kit. -- 18:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I took so long, school term started and I had lots of homework --Wavetail (talk) 08:11, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink so its not such a straight line, and add some shading/define shading on the collar?

Smooth out the shading everywhere, try a 7px brush for small spaces and a 10px brush for bigger spaces at 40% strength. -- 23:34, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don’t think it looks like I smudged/blurred the shading... —Wavetail (talk) 01:05, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a difference. Maybe do what I said multiple times, then reup again? -- 01:09, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reup This will take... a while, to say the least —Wavetail (talk) 22:55, October 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you recede the dorsal stripe just a bit? Seems to thick in comparison to the rest of the set. 16:29, October 21, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Still working, just very busy due to school term starting. —Wavetail (talk) 22:07, October 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Is this what you meant? —Wavetail (talk) 00:46, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Jayclaw (K) - For Approval
Ok lets try this again! Moo (talk) 03:36, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading on the ear fluff behind the ear closest to us? Looks like it's leaking shading there. 15:44, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 23:21, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the facial shading so it curves with the shape of the face; it shouldn't stretch all the way to the eye, but rather curve and also cover the chin

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 05:22, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

It still goes and hits to the eye; I do mean to say, that it needs to recede from there.

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 06:46, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

Colours are still off a little bit, and I think its mainly your shading tint that's doing it? I've repicked colours for your this time, instead of giving straight hexcodes. The nose should be black per the warrior, and the eyes need to be a paler blue than what you've got at the moment. Could you also define the shading depth a little - just add a second layer of shading that covers areas that will be darker like the "neck" and the underside of the tail and such - like this image. One last thing too, I promise, maybe smudge the earpink a little more so it's not sitting in such a straight line?

Reuploaded and colourpicked! Moo (talk) 08:07, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth a touch more? -- 18:28, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 22:43, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little bit of shading to the area above the tail tip (the shoulder?)

Still working? 15:09, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 20:40, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

Snowbird (Ki) - For Approval
i won't withdraw this, i promise. 02:28, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out a lot, but, also maybe use less? Sometimes white cats can be painfull with shading so by using less you can save yourself a lot of trouble. Also add some shading to >> that side of the cat, behind the tail

'''reuploaded. 14:44, October 8, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the shading overall and add ear shading to the ear closest to us? 23:14, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading just a small touch imo, seems a bit dark currently imo, given it isn't tinted

'''reuploaded. 01:01, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can you define the shading on the foreleg? 15:22, October 11, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. 00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

I think the shading on the tail can be smoothed a bit more. 15:13, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading on the shoulder/above the foreleg needs to be smoothed out, and the facial shading expanded. -- 18:29, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the facial shading is fine as is - but, the rest of Potato's comment still stands. Also, curve the shoulder/neck shading to our right if your light source is coming from our left? (if that doesn't make sense - I can send a redline your way :D)

Define the light on the tail. -- 23:34, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

'''reuploaded. a redline would be lovely, max. 16:14, October 19, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference on tail light. It still looks gray. -- 16:20, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

accidentally said reuploaded before uploading the image, sorry. but i did now. 16:21, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

here ya go! that's roughly where shading should be with this source, lots of soft, round edges to show off the shape of the cat :D

Still working?

Swallowtail (WC) (W) - For Approval
03:56, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Should I remove eye shading? 14:53, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, and define the light on the tail? 23:15, October 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 00:59, October 9, 2019 (UTC)'''

Add a bit more depth to the front legs shading, and smooth it out a touch on the haunch

'''reuploaded. uh, i know it hasn't been five days, but, may i have more comments? i wanna get this approved before sunday because i'll be gone for a week, starting sunday. no internet at all. 00:48, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth the shading on the shoulder, and define the light (remove shading) on the tail. 15:14, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:00, October 12, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the earpink? I can't see it at all. 20:34, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

The eyeshine in < this eye appears to be overblurred. Can you also erase a few pixels on the eyeshine so more of the general pupil shows? -- 03:31, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the eye depth too while you're at it?

Still working?

reuploaded. 16:23, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the tail some more, especially along the bend closest to us? I also think the base may be slightly darker than the rest of the set? 22:14, October 20, 2019 (UTC)

Stormfur (K) - For Approval
stormy baby -- 15:28, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the texture should be much sharper? 22:56, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:59, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the base is too dark, by a little. Perhaps grab a file from Skye for the CG or whatnot

Reuploaded Colorpicked from the CG again. This should be correct. -- 23:26, October 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the texture ever so slightly, so it’s not so pencily?

Reuploaded -- 19:06, October 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think there should be more texture and have it overlapping more? 22:48, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Drop me your email on my talk page and I can shoot you a file or two if you'd like. ​​

Reuploaded I think I can hang on without the files for now, but thanks for the offer =) -- 22:57, October 14, 2019 (UTC)

Add more of the darker (more orange shades) to the eye; it seems like in porportion, the others have a lot less of that yellowyish when there is space for it to be seen

Reuploaded -- 01:55, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

Can I ask what your source is? I'm having a hard time seeing where its coming from?

This and this.

Okay, well could you add that little bit of neck shading that both those references have? That would help show the source better

Reuploaded I had only realized when I left my house that I missed the neck shading. Such fail. -- 23:27, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

The base should be #333333 and the nose should be #200c0c. I'm not sure why you have the nose black here, but that shouldn't be the case. The texture is honestly just pure black, lightened and tweaked a bit with a pure white texture layer on very low opacity for the most part. Here's an unshaded picture of the head, and your eye color appears to be less orange than what I have here. Since you don't want the file, I'll give you this instead. ​​​​

Reuploaded -- 23:50, October 16, 2019 (UTC)

The texture still seems too rough and slightly too light, too. Also think there should be some shading on the haunch, maybe on <--- side? 22:17, October 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'd also recommend accepting the file from Jayce, since sometimes guessing texture's hues and opacity percentages can be tough to eyeball without the file. 22:18, October 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded *waves white flag* Okay Jayce, you can gladly toss his file over to me. -- 22:22, October 20, 2019 (UTC)

Unsure if you have the file yet or not. But the lighter texture seems very sharp here. It's almost as if the dark and light textures make up everything - and the base doesn't show through nearly at all - when it definitely does on the other images.

I have not received the file yet. -- 23:16, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried erasing some places on both texture layers to see if that would help base visibility any. -- 23:40, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Unknown Residence Kit Blanks - For Approval
the babies 04:45, October 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

i think the little area where there's nothing behind the booty (lol) on the shorthair shouldn't be there. 14:54, 10/19/2019

Maybe make the eyes a little larger? Kits tend to have proportionally larger eyes 16:23, October 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 18:47, October 19, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

For the largest pawpad on the back paw; could you hollow it out so it can be filled in the center? *cute toe beans*

Could you possibly add more floof to the long-haired? Like maybe along the back or on the haunch somewhere, what works best for you. 22:23, October 20, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:05, October 21, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Sweetbriar (W) - CBA
Not quite happy with it yet, I'll work on matching the stripe style better but posting now so I dont loose it 18:16, October 21, 2019 (UTC)

reup 02:06, October 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Storm Pelt (K) - CBA
Colors were picked from the warrior. 17:27, October 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shaping/shape of the tail patches? I can make out the edges better on the other images than here (for lack of better words it just kinda is faded under the patterning)

Re-uploaded. I defined a few other spots too. 15:36, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Reedclaw (Q) - CBA
picked the colors from her apprentice. 03:52, October 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sandstorm (Alt W) - CBA


CBA?

Spotted Fur (K) ~ For Approval
16:20, October 23, 2019 (UTC)

Tempest (Sister) - For Approval
hello. ​

oh queen; smooth out the shading on ---> leg a bit?? 03:23, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. We stan a beautiful queen.

I think the dorsal stripe is just a smidge more defined (for lack of better words, less smudged out and more of a blacker shape) on the other images than here

Hawk (Sister) (Sister) ~ CBA
01:29, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:19, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

Flurry (Sister) ~ CBA


Cute. CBA? 14:00, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

Furze (Sis) - CBA
I cannot believe I have done a whole set wow. -- 01:44, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

curve the tail shading a bit more with the blank's curve? also expand the shading on << side a little, there'd probably be a little bit underneath the chin.

Reuploaded -- 03:09, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Congrats on your first set! CBA? 14:01, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

Snow (Sister) (Sister) - For Approval
i really hate trying to shade white cats

01:54, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smoothen out the tail shading a bit? 03:12, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

waste around the entire image, but overall a beauty 03:30, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded the tail is going to be the death of me. i'm also not seeing any waste on my file, could you perhaps highlight it? 04:25, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

tail shading could stand to be smoothed out more 17:03, 10/24/2019

reuploaded 01:48, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

Sparrow (Sister) - For Approval
These are really neat blanks! 03:11, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Nice work with the pattern^^ I have the files for the set if you need them. I think the white is just smudged just a little less back and forth as it appears here, and more used as a smoothing method on the other images.

reup Thank you! I think I'll be ok without the file, at least for now 16:15, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Sunrise (Sister) ~ For Approval
All colors from rogue. Comments? 03:32, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

I really don't think the undertail would be visible on this blank... disregard if it's artist's choice tho. 17:02, 10/24/2019

Reuploaded. 18:09, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add a little more shading to cup the face/curve to the muzzle, since that area looks a touch flat?

Reuploaded. 21:55, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Grass (Sister) - CBA
<3

CBA? 14:02, October 25, 2019 (UTC)

Stone (Sister) (S) - For Approval
Colors from the kit. 15:32, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Moonlight (Sister) - For Approval
23:09, October 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Where's the tail floof? -- 23:14, October 24, 2019 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (K) ~ For Approval
Maybe not trash? idk 00:57, October 25, 2019 (UTC)