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Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg

as a head's up, go ahead and start matching the pale blue-gray shade you see in the old one's prior revisions, we're swapping her and Mistystar to be pale due to a LS cite, per PC

'''Reuploaded! ''' Is this the right one? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  23:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add just a little more light to the muzzle, specifically on << side of the face, as its in more light?

With your source, I think the top part of your >tail wohld be in light as it has shading on too to bottom and that doesn't make since with the source so if you could fix that  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:45, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little light to the top of the paws 04:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There are also three pixels of waste between the hind paw and the front <--- paw. 22:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading depth to the haunch, it still comes off as flat-ish imo compared to the rest of the image

Still working?

14:32, June 16, 2019 (UTC) Yes sorry i just finished finals!! I'll upload asap -Shadow   hOnK :o)  04:21, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

There's three pixels of waste underneath the tail, and could you maybe define the earpink? 22:47, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch; there's a couple places where it's still pretty saturated 17:35, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Dawnflower (K) - For Approval
We're back, baby. I changed a few things, including the shading and adding the small gap in the haunch that I forgot before. I'll upload her warrior tommorow. Comments? 02:04, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, especially around the cheek bone and smudge/blur the earpink into a pelt some so it's not such a perfect straight line 02:21, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

expand and smooth the haunch, please.

05:38, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth all the shading  Ellie  life is an illusion 15:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded this is as far I'm willing to go with the face shading, as my source doesn't call for it to go all the way up the cheekbone. 22:37, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Where would the source be from, then? The seems very close to one of the two typical sources we see here - in all but the cheekbone. Unless other things give, what is here does call for it to connect, as Scarlet said.

The source is Baykit's. I'll reupload in a moment. 23:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Since your using Baykit's source, the facial shading corves all the way down so you would need to do as Scarlet said.  Ellie  life is an illusion 23:13, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:00, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink a little more into the pelt? It still looks like a straight line,

Also, as an addition, can you connect the jaw shading to the chest? With this source, that should all be shadow.

Reuploaded  23:55, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Considerong you haunch shading isn't expanded much can you either expamd that or recede the tail shadinf  Ellie  life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:52, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded fixing the shading. This looks better. 23:46, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the forepaws and tailtip. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:56, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

fill in shading at the base of the arm, where it appears to be leaking from the lineart

Reuploaded  21:38, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the underside of the tail and haunch, the transition's still pretty blunt 04:17, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smudge my shading. I hope this looks better. 16:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

So I was discussing this with a few other people and wanted to bring something up. I think the tint of the shading should be dulled. And yes, I fully realize we leave the tint up to the artist most times, but not in cases where it interferes with set matchability. This looks nice on it's own, but I've put it with the others in the set, and it clashes and makes the images appear incongruent. It can obviously still retain some form of tint, but something not quite as prominent, in my opinion, so that the set meshes well.

Reuploaded No, I understand. 23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Cool great. I believe the shading could stand to be lightened some, and it's leaking away from the lineart at the bottom of where the arm hits the tail; both in that elbow crease and where it meets the tail tip. The shading at the side of the cheek, given this source, similar to how you've got it on Blackstar/Bluebellkit

Reuploaded rip cheek shading  02:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the face.

14:36, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:47, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink color here seems duller and less saturated than the app and queen, which came before the elder that has the lighter shade

Reuploaded colorpicked from the queen  20:46, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

This is definitely getting close, and good job keeping up with it. Here's a little something for you; red is waste, blue is little bits of shading that should be removed that are leaking over from whenever they were smoothed - but as are, contradict the source; green is little bits of shading that still remain sharp, and thus could be smoothed.

Reuploaded woohoo  00:51, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the tail shading, and recede how high it goes on that front arm's upper section (it needn't go higher than the eye, really)

Reuploaded  22:24, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The arm hasn't been receded at all - the revision history doesn't show it. The tail shading is also pretty much just as sharp as before

Reuploaded didn't like the shading so I changed the light source and tinted it blue. The source is Wrenkit's.  00:59, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Why did you change the shading placement? I get that it's artist's choice, but the other source was so close to being done. Smooth the haunch shading and recede the shading on the face. It shouldn't be covering that much space. 01:15, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Same as my comment on the warrior

Reuploaded Well.. idk what to say except I'm very very very picky on light sources. I went back to the one I had before, but kept the blue shading. Now thinking about it, I like this source better. 02:40, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Missiing the connecting cheek shading here - per logic in prior comments, it does need to be there.

Reuploaded  21:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste it seems under the front paws

Reuploaded attempted to smooth out the shading as well  22:15, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth that shading out a little bit more?

Reuploaded yep I can  22:51, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Earpink here is darker than the other images - try and grab a different spot that isn't in shading on another image?

Reuploaded hopefully this is the right color. 02:25, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm. It's closer. For reference, I'm fairly sure the queen uses #9e7476. Could you also smooth out the shading on the tail and just under the visible ear?

Reuploaded  20:33, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more.

can you define the eye depth? 02:15 Wed Jun 12

Dsfine the light source in the < ear  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more  Ellie  life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened the shading depth  21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg

Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat?

Reuploaded  16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.

Reuploaded  23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit.

14:38, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:48, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some light to the chest and legs, add some depth so it doesn't seem flat like it is on the legs and chest area  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll add light to the chest and shading depth, but Mink, this is the exact same way the legs are on the source I mentioned above, with the exception of the bounce light. 16:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did the things I mentoned. 16:06, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still looks flat, and should also be made to curve on the face instead of go in a line straight down. Also, same comment for the earpink color as on the kit

I get there shouldn't be light down there since I've used this source before, but it shouldn't look so flat as it is does. There should be depth. Adding some shading light should help add depth to the lighter parts of the shading there as well as some darker bits, like Blackstar has. The haunch is also leaking <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:51, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the light source to Bouncefire's.  20:42, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch could be swooped downward to encompass the curve (basically putting the shading on the lower haunch and connecting it), and removing some from the tail tip because there wouldn't be as much. 21:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:25, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, it should be on the bottom of the tail, iirc. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:01, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire's source has the shading on top of the tail, not the bottom. 14:06, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire is a tabby, its not seen as prominent as this. As some others have probably said. One shading on another character might not work for another. The source contradicts the shading on the tail, it should be on the bottom as its inconsistent with it on the top. It doesn't make sense when the light is coming from > and the shading is where there should be light. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:55, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The shading can also be smoothed, too. 21:11, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploadeddddd again fixing a few things. 22:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

that bit thats still on the top should be curveddown as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded herpaderpderp  22:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

That's not what I meant, I'll give a redline inna minute. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

here, this is basically what im getting from you shading source so i did a redline. As well as fixing that, lighten and smooth your shading. It could use quite a bit of smoothing <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:25, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the tint to blue. I like this one better. 00:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Curve up the haunch shading so it shows off the shape of the thigh. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded rip I tried  01:07, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the line of shading going across the thigh. I think what Mink was referring to was curving the shading downward to encompass the bottom of the thigh. And smooth the shading, too. 01:10, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think the best way for the shading to go is to have a look at the updated shading chart, as it shows the two most common sources that users have been using for the warrior blanks + kits.

Reuploaded double rip, matched to tutorials. 02:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the over all shading a bit, then on the back line art the shading is very faint, define that? 15:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

That spot of shading still looks fairly light compared with the rest of the shading, making it look inconsistent. Could you make it match in depth more? I think the depth could be defined on both front legs and the face - perhaps expand it to go under the chin? Smooth it by the bend in the tail, it looks blotchy, and the haunch and shoulder shading could be smoothed some more as well. 23:45, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix the shading more tomorrow. 01:28, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Extend the haunch shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:41, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:10, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the back and blur the transition more 23:12, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:19, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste by the back paws and >> ear; and I also think the shading should be smoothed.

Reuploaded tried using a pressured opacity smudge brush  20:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is a little bit blotchy at the top of the flank <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 09:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:37, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still very blotchy on the flank, shoulder, haunch and tail. 19:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded what even is that shoulder shading anymore. 20:14, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

SkyClan's Destiny gray she-cat (W) ~ For Evaluation
My first canon charart. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 07:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading please? also there was a thumb on your image so i removed it :)

10:32, June 15, 2019 (UTC) whoops sorry for the double comment. the eyelashes should be removed as they are not in use to define gender anymore

10:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Soften up the texture a bit to match her kittypet. Good work! 13:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 13:46, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumb the image by going into source mode and removing the |left. Make the pupils less of a square, add eyeshine, and define the shading on the hind feet. 14:11, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Changed the heading from approval to evaluation since you're still a kit^^ Smooth the shading on the legs and flank, and there appears to be shading leaking from the chest and leg farthest from us, then add some to the ears. Nice job on this! 14:31, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes look like there's still lashes, that part shouldn't be there iirc <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:10, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 08:27, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the < front leg to remove the blotchiness, and you've got some waste outside the back

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:16, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, the back paw farthest from us would have some shading, though not completely in shadow. 20:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The eye color also seems different than the kittypet. Nice job doing the texture btw! 00:39, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 14:41, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and darken everywhere 23:34, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

There would be a little shading under the jaw with this source, and define the shading on the hind paw farthest from us. This may just be my screen, but there might be waste under the paws. 01:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 18:47, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

There is a lot of waste everywhere around her, so please remove that. Can you expand the face shading a bit to touch the eye and jaw, and a touch on the front leg closest to us? 22:05, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 09:25, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the front leg furthest to us :3 <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  12:33, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking a tiny bit on the back. 15:21, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (Ki) - For Approval
I think it's fine if I pick this back up? if its not lmk. I kind of stopped working bc i got sick and its hard for me to draw when I'm sick.. I still kind of am, but i'm feeling far better and so I created this demon. This time I got the original file for the kit. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste above the back <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:38, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups wasteus deletus <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up. Perhaps reupload again? 01:07, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

It's now showing up. 01:31, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add some more brown spots near the shoulder, just looking at the Hunter's side for reference.

Still working?

mhm im reupping when I get to the computer tonight <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:09, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt W) - For Approval
oa claim, used vecs deputy file for everything <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:32, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

This looks good! There should be white on the belly and the stripes should be a bit more jagged and not a linear. What I did is use a small brush and brush tightly up and down across the blank. 16:08, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
tried to copy the deputy and old warrior's pattern but uhhh.. idrk what i did lmao

15:36, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the patches on the other images seem more sharply smudged than these; these appear a bit softer on the edges

Reuploaded

13:53, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a touch more 23:09, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Ki) - For Approval
<span style="">16:34 Wed Jun 19

Can you define the shading overall, and smooth out the tail shading? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:45, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

In addition to Jose's comments, might you also expand the shading as well? I understand if that's just part of your source, though.

Driftkit (K) - For Approval
00:38, June 20, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you darken the shading a little bit?

reuploaded 17:44, June 20, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I know the old image doesn't have it - but it's super old, and so I think perhaps take some colors from here because that's where the cite is. The shadow of the hawk darkens him more than his fur actually is, and so the head/tailtip is where the colors should be from.

reuploaded okay, tried matching the colors in that image more closely 02:08, June 21, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Better^^ Could you add those four darker stripes (two coming off the eyes on the sides, and the two going on the forehead, and the slightly paler markings for beneath them and the muzzle?

reuploaded 19:52, June 21, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Emberkit (DotC) (K) - CBA
00:39, June 20, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Can you brighten up the white? And maybe blur the white on the forehead a smidge  00:42, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 00:48, June 20, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

can you define the body shading slightly? adorable btw <span style="">23:34 Thu Jun 20

reuploaded thank you ! 00:13, June 21, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA?

Duskpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
oa claim from spooky

12:02, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

The colors look very different from the apprentice, and the stripes look more sharply jagged. 17:13, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

18:00, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

I think, to match the app, the haunch stripes could be a little thinner and more broken up as they go to the >> side of the cat

Would you like the file for the apprentice? 18:14, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Firestar (K) ~ CBA
Might try to add the tag later. 16:34, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Got his little bell 18:19, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Curlfeather (K) ~ CBA
i come bearing gifts 19:01, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Oakheart (Alt W) - CBA
Ah, the tawny alt of mine that brings back so many memories.

CBA?

Sol (Alt Ki) - CBA
How could such a cute bean turn so cruel?

bc he's a life ruiner he ruins cats' lives exaggerate the smudge on the black and white patches on his haunch? they're a touch bold 23:08, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA?

Frostclaw (W) - For Approval
Fluffy girl  22:10, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Might you smooth out the overall shading, and define it on the ears and upper head?

Reuploaded  22:30, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 17:57, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:55, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading a little above the rectangle shading piece on the forleg so it connects to the shoulder/upper forearm shading some more? Seems very abrupt atm 21:18, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Furzepelt (W) - For Approval
furzestar 2020 <span style="">23:32 Thu Jun 20

CBA?

Sorry to break, but I can't really see the light source on this one. It seems like the shading just traces the whole image.

Fernshade (W) - For Approval
I don't know which was harder: Berrynose, Dapplenose, or this. Tried to colorpick from the StarClan image. And before anyone says something, the "white" isn't white, it's a light creamy-gray. 23:34, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

this is really good!! can you smudge out the two brown spots on the tail so they're not so hard edged? and perhaps darkening the body shading a little wouldn't hurt either <span style="">23:35 Thu Jun 20

Reuploaded x2 because SAI hates me again. Hope I got the spots you meant! 23:42, June 20, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add just a little bit of black to the top of the back leg? The queen looks as though it has some there - this is absolutely gorgeous by the way, good job matching!

Reuploaded. Thank you ;w; 18:00, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

It might just be my eyes, but I think the colors appear duller on the other images? 19:09, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened just a touch. Also messed with shading. 20:10, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

For lack of better words, I feel the patches of colors are sharper on the other images, whereas they seem smoothed out here

Palesky (K) ~ CBA
00:56, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a black chin?

Reups I don't know why I keep forgetting that 15:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Flower (Ro) (K) ~ CBA
adapted the collar lineart from firestar's kit, couldn't come up with a not-choke collar myself

I'm glad you're using this pattern again. CBA? 19:03, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (Kit) ~ For Approval


Isn't this supposed to exactly match, or close enough, to Bramblestar's kit? Stripe wise. 15:18, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded altered the haunch stripes but the rest match

Plumwillow (Alt. W4) ~ For Evaluation
Haven't been here for a while! :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  13:46, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:04, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  14:15, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink. (The correct file is Plumwillow.warrior.alt4.png) 14:38, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Got it for you. Was just missing the File part in the code. 15:17, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more, and the lineart is graying in some places. 15:31, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  01:08, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, few things. What tool are you using to make the shading? Is it the burn tool or are you using a pencil/brush to draw/paint it on? The shading still could be defined a few ticks more. The lineart is still graying, it's being covered by something. Try erasing on your layers to return it back to its original color. Kill the waste outside the back. Smudge the earpink a bit as well. 01:12, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe have a look at the updated shading chart, for where to place some shading. Right now, add some onto the face and under her chin and down her legs on our left.

Reuploaded~ :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:13, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste under the paws. Can you define the light source on < this front leg, fix the eyeshine so she doesn't look cross-eyed, and add shading to the ears? 03:15, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:24, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the random white lines above the back. Define the eye depth and the shading depth (remember, adding a layer of thinner, darker shading) and add shading to >>> this side of the tail as well, there would be some shading there with your source. 03:27, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded OMSC the white lines thing is so frightening :P <span style="color:#3c0f5c;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:57, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looking better! Add shading to the back paw farthest from us and the front leg farthest from us. Define the shading on the ears and chest. 04:34, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh thank you so much Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="color:violet;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:mistyrose 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,cyan,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightcyan);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Chiller,serif">loving me  05:22, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the ears (the insides of the ears would have some shading), expand the shading more on the front leg farthest from us, and add shading to the back paw closest to us. Nice job with the textured shading so far! 15:41, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Graypool (W) - For Approval
colours from elder

Goldenflower (W) - For Approval
used the old colours but, did give the shading a warmer tint to make 'em warmer

Ferncloud (W) - For Approval
i love this pattern but gosh its hard

reuploaded leg stripes were bugging me

Spikefur (W) ~ For Approval
Colors from apprentice, which was first in the set. Comments? 23:16, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W) ~ For Approval
Decided to give him a knew design, since I'm the OA and he only had the one image. Comments? 23:16, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelwhisker (W) ~ For Approval
Colors from original, which was first in the set. Comments? Also, I know about the waste. I'll fix it in a minute. 23:16, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:19, June 21, 2019 (UTC)

Gorseclaw (TC) (K) ~ For Approval
uwu

Firestar (W) ~ For Approval
14:39, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the stripes should be a tad softer. 15:30, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Willow Tail (W) ~ For Approval
SL mistake image, counts as new, as no prior version.

Fuzzypelt (W) - For Approval
Love this guy. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:36, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ferretclaw (W) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:36, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a bit? 21:19, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Crowfrost (W) - For Approval
Will thin out the face marking soon. 18:49, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:10, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Flintfang (W) - For Approval
Realized just how light the shading looks outside of SAI so I'll go darken that in a bit. 18:49, June 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:10, June 22, 2019 (UTC)