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Willowpelt (K) ~ For Approval
This looks horrible I know 09:25, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the face a bit, and there's leaking shading along the face, foreleg, and haunch. 02:02, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:59, December 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail. Also, the shading is leaking on the haunch and I think the face as well (I'm not sure if the light between the shading and lineart on the face is intentional, but I don't think it should be there anyway given your source). 14:42, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pink seems to be fading on <—— side of the ear. I’m not sure if you did that on purpose but it seems like it just doesn’t fit right with the image--​​​​ 16:15, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

its a stylist kinda thing, ear fur doesn't have to fill the entire lineart, and adding to Ivy's comment, the depth could definitely be defined as well 17:34, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Similar with the warrior, the eye color needs to match the set. This looks a little too dark right now. -- 17:39, December 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I referenced the eyes from the StarClan file btw 06:31, December 27, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the jaw and hind leg. 00:20, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:28, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is still leaking in the areas Patch mentioned. -- 23:35, December 28, 2019 (UTC)

I can provide a red line if you need one. 18:51, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, please! 22:05, December 29, 2019 (UTC)

here are the spots I was talking about, hope this helps^^ 17:32, December 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 09:23, January 1, 2020 (UTC)

There's still shading leaking in the areas Patch mentioned. Add some more shading along the lower jaw, behind the ear closest to us, and the back heel/haunch area peeking out from behind. 00:22, January 2, 2020 (UTC)

I probably won't get this done. I'd like to withdraw. 09:48, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

I'll take over. 02:54, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:45, January 7, 2020 (UTC)'''

Smooth out that edge of shading on the haunch closest to the rump, please. ​

'''reuploaded. 15:35, January 7, 2020 (UTC)'''

Willowpelt (W) - For Approval
I tried out some bounce light so let's see how this goes.. the shading also does not want to co-op with me. -- 20:35, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 20:37, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 20:45, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

can you maybe move the white on the left eye a bit? With it centered in the pupil its making the pupils in each eye look different sizes. And add some light to the chin.

Reuploaded Changes are not showing for me; just in case check the file history for the updated image. -- 21:35, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading just a bit more? 05:17, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

I think the shading could most be smoothened out on the chest. Also, there appears to be leaking shading on the top of the shoulder by the lineart. 16:50, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

That's bounce light, Egg. -- 16:53, January 6, 2020 (UTC)

Bounce light should be going down the whole length of the back then, not just the shoulder. There would also be a bit of a bounce light on the tail too.

Reuploaded Shading. Pain. Much. -- 00:10, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure if this is supposed to be there but the shading seems to disappear on <—— side (by the spine/back)--​​ 01:03, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

It's bounce light, Oceanpelt. It's intentional, and I was told to add more (hence why I reupped a while ago). -- 01:21, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

It should be a more uniform line, at the moment it looks quite patchy which is why it looks like leading shading. It should be one very soft line on the edge of the shading ( I normally have my base shading layer cover the area, and then have my depth layer create the bounce light).

Oh, what’s bounce light?— 06:15, January 7, 2020 (UTC)

Ambermoon (W) - CBA
23:36, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

CBA?

Brackenpelt (W) - CBA
23:36, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

CBA?

Crowtail (W) - CBA
23:36, January 4, 2020 (UTC)

CBA?

Palebird (Ki) - CBA
All colors from the .psd file for the queen. ​

CBA? 22:53, January 7, 2020 (UTC)