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Harepounce (W) ~ For Approval
When I first made it I rushed so it looks like poo. I'm sorry. ;-; ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:31, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and neck :) 01:24 Tue Sep 1

Lighten the shading all together. 04:14, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Redone-ish by the former Skiddleybopblitz! Ech. I forgot to lighten. 22:13:55 1 Sep 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? 00:48, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry to sound stupid, but all of them or just X amount of them? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:31, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Would you mind defining it on all the legs? 20:25, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

And perhaps lighten the front legs? The legs themselves are a significantly darker brown than the other. I understand it's shading, but when you incorporate the comments above, it should look better. 21:04 Wed Sep 2

Reuploaded Posting this before bed so I may have 1,000% more errors than usual. If I forgot my signature then aw crap. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:13, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and legs. 11:16, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's getting kinda difficult for me to lighten the shading without it looking too bad, at least in my eyes. Anyway, is this gonna get declined because I was in Fort Wayne yesterday and this morning/afternoon? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:48, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

i can't see your light source 13:32, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Don't know what to do right at this moment but here is my image of her without the shading blurred. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:23, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should remove the shading on the chest. Your shading seems to be over blurred, actually. Maybe that's causing the problem. 10:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dunno if this looks any different. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:21, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Played with the bottom shading. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:00, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload numbero tres smoothed out shading ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:23, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? 13:20, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Im not in PCA so im probably not allowed to comment but define the eye depth? Pal124 (talk) 15:15, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Possibly smooth out the back shading a little more? 17:19 Sat Sep 12

Pal124, of course you can comment - no one is restricted to not commenting. Can you make the earpink a little duller? 23:06, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know if anything actually changed. I did get lazy and use gaussian blur then smooth out some shading with the blur tool at a low rate (like 5). I might've dulled the earpink down a bit too much. Only thing I didn't change was the eye depth. Could I get a second opinion on it? I'm not saying it's okay or isn't okay, but I'm not fully sure. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:31, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

I think the eye depth should be defined a little. 23:54, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded If I made it worse then that kinda confirms that I can't define it any more... maybe. Should I revert it? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:25, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:20, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think I can define the light any more. It's difficult for me. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:20, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. 20:23, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:33, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs, and tbh the shading looks a bit overblurred. 22:42, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

I am not in PCA but tbh the the shading does not look overblurred. --Pal124 (talk) 23:49, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Kind of agree with Pal, BC. Sorry ;-; Also, can you lighten the shading on the midriff? There's a dark patch of shading there. 08:39, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can you please also dull earpink? It looks way too unnatural right now imo 08:42, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (TC) (K) ~ CBA
This is acualy the first submission, '''this is my baby! Belllastar (talk) 02:49, September 1, 2015 (UTC)'''

Maybe make the earpink a little pinker? BCPrincess73 (talk) 03:05, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

I changed the title of this, for it's supposed to be "under evaluation" as you are still a kit. Can you define the shading on < side of her body? 03:13, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add/define neck shading 09:11, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. 12:02, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define and/or lighten the eye colour. She looks like she has black eyes. And Belllastar? You did awesome, alot better than me. ~Spottehwobble

Add shading down the right (our right) edge of both front legs, and the tail shading should be on the other side of the tail, if the light is coming from the left. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:51, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Belllastar (talk) 00:04, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs? 00:52, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and define the light on the little back paw. There should be at least a bit of light there. Also define the shading under the chin on the neck. 00:53, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

I still don't see any shading on the right side of the right front leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:16, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

and maybe darken the underbelly (area between the two front legs) a tad. 21:02 Wed Sep 2

You'll need to ask someone to rename this to File:Rabbitleap (TC).kit.png. 09:27 Thu Sep 3

I renamed this for you. From now on, you'll need to upload over the filename Berry gave you.

You know what you are doing, i'll promote you into an apprentice. 02:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, though? 05:41, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

YES I just need CBA Belllastar (talk) 12:23, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

If you reuploaded, you'll need to comment and say you did so. I think there should be neck shading with this source... I don't seem to see any?

Lighten the shading too, please 14:18, September 7, 2015 (UTC) re ups how do you lighten shading

Don't forget to sign your messages with ~. Anyway, to lighten shading, just lower the opacity of the shading layer. 11:57, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Belllastar (talk) 21:33, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

blur the ear pink please. 02:34, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs 13:21, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

reups Belllastar (talk) 21:03, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail 12:29, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

I think her tail is fine, but can you blur the shading some more? 23:05, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

uhhhggg pixlr crashed so no I cant. Belllastar (talk) 02:19, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

cba? Belllastar (talk) 11:09, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

You can't CBA images, Bellastar. I'll CBA this. 11:52, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting, but I honestly can't see the shading on the legs. Define it a bit if it's possible? 17:32, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

reups Belllastar (talk) 23:51, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 13:58, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Cloudberry (TC) (Medicine) ~ For Approval
I tried. Estimate, please, I want to be useful. I made "fur" light and shade. I took a flattened muzzle at Yellowfang. ✨ShineStar✨ 09:52, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but you need to reserve this on the reservation table on the main page first. Everything that gets posted here should be reserved first. Until then, I'll need to decline this image. Feel free to repost (after this has been archived and you've properly reserved the image). If you don't know how to do so, please ask, and one of us will be able to help you. =D

How to make it? ✨ShineStar✨ 10:54, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I make it! ✨ShineStar✨ 11:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading? Nice <3 01:55, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yes :) It is pleasant to you? It is possible to add? ✨ShineStar✨ 08:13, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I made shadows shorter. ✨ShineStar✨ 08:17, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs a little bit? I'm glad to see you found out how to reserve the image. =)

Can you smooth out the shading a tad? Also, this file needs to be re-named Cloudberry (TC).mc.png 14:25, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

I completely changed a treatment of light and shade and I changed the name. ✨ShineStar✨ 11:43, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights some. 16:00, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean and how to make it? ✨ShineStar✨ 08:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

New version! I made (sorry, my english is bad =) ) texture of long fur. ✨ShineStar✨ 16:32, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading more please 16:34, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Since you had asked for like, an explanation: do you see how on the other images on here, the shading is super smooth (for lack a better word) and you can't really see the transition from base color to shading? It's just shading? Blur the shading so it's like that. Also: your English is perfectly fine, don't worry. 21:07, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

I washed away as much as possible. I tried in the Gimp. Also, i ise Translate. ✨ShineStar✨ 09:17, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading? It seems like it was just paint-brushed onto her in big grey blobs. If you want some help with this, you are always welcome to ask a member =) 10:03, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The transition from pelt colour to shading's a bit abrupt, you should blur it some. Gaussian Blur helps a lot :3 Also, the shading on the legs should be a little more, uh, defined. :3 13:26, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

I done. ✨ShineStar✨ 07:09, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

How? <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 07:45, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail, please. Nice job. 14:07, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Eep, this is turning out beautiful. Define shading on the legs and tail as BC said, and on the head. This is great :D 03:52, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Please try not to repeat comments autumnbright. 14:55, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

I done? <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 12:37, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the legs 04:17, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yesss <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 09:32, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

I done? <font style="color: #99adff">✨ShineStar✨ 15:55, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Heronwing (TC) (W) ~ For Approval
Meh.

Define the stripes - I can barely see them 15:41, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading as well 17:59, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

stripes dont have to be super defined, as long as you can tell theyre there its fine. but define the earpink just a tad? Nubface (talk) 18:39, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'm actually having trouble making the stripes out, so a little definition wouldn't hurt.

Re-uploaded ~ Defined all stuff. c:

Could you darken the tail shading a tiny bit? This is adorable, btw. ^.^

Re-uploaded ~ :3

Could you possibly lighten/raise the opacity of the earpink just a tad please? If you believe it's fine, then feel free to disregard me. I don't feel like going into a full blown argument over the shade if others disagree. 10:13, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

i think the earpink is fine tbh ^^ <span style="">20:43, 09/8/2015

I can barely make out the earpink from the fur. Could you either make it more saturated and pink, or make it lighter? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:33, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 08:24, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ Defined the earpink somewhat. Sorry for being late. ^_^'

Dull the earpink please. 23:04, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

I think the ear pink looks fine. Define the light on the tail and face 04:18, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 13:58, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Fallowsong (W) ~ CBA
Uh, so here is Fallowsong. I'm a kit for PCA rn and wanted to contribute something so here :D

Kind-of mottled light brown; please tell me if I should remove the mottles.

Autumnbright (talk) 06:10, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This needs to match the queen image. Also, this should say for evaluation. 06:43, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I matched the queen image. Thanks for rectifying errors ^.^ By the way, I uploaded another image because the old one didn't have the right name. Autumnbright (talk) 07:04, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This is really nice! Maybe blur the shading a bit? <span style="">07:08 Tue Sep 8

Re-upload: Blurred shading a tad; should I decrease opacity? Autumnbright (talk) 09:09, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I think so. 09:38, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Please darken and blur it more, add some depth, too. This is nice :) 09:57, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I added highlights and darkened shading. Tell me if it needs more blurrin', I had to redo shading so idk XD Thank you for all the encouragement so far, it means so much to me! Autumnbright (talk) 10:14, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and possibly add more shading at the haunch? 10:32, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I'm not very happy with the shading/highlights balance. T T Autumnbright (talk) 10:49, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Can you lighten the shading a tinyy bit on the midriff? 10:54, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink seems to be over blurred. Define it? 11:27, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I couldn't really do anything about the midriff shading, so any tips? I corrected earpink, its layer was deleted for some reason XD Autumnbright (talk) 11:41, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Another Re-upload: Actually, I think I figured out the lightenation (I coined a word hehe) thing for the midriff shading. Is that better? Autumnbright (talk) 11:53, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, please? And since you know what you're doing here, I'll promote you into an apprentice. Now the heading can say "for approval". =) 12:15, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Defined tail shading and edited overall highlights/shadey. I feel as if the tail looks dual-coloured now tho XD And thank youuu, Burntclaw :D Autumnbright (talk) 12:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-reupload: Blended tail shading a bit because it was bothering me XD Autumnbright (talk) 12:35, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the highlight on the haunch and the shading next to it? 14:00, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload: I'm sorry if the blur isn't apparent - I'm afraid it might be too undefined if I blur it too much. 14:39, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Much better! Maybe lighten the shading a little on the neck and tail? 16:51, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the light at the base of the tail. 20:55, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Defined/lightened shading, redid shading/highlights on the tail :3 -- 10:49, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch seems a little blotchy. Try adding some more and smoothing it out. 13:04, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Is it okay if you elaborate? I really can't see the blotches you're talking about. Also, when I tried to add shading, it just made everything look, uh, uneven. Any tips? 13:43, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think with that light source the light on the front paw farthest away from us would be coming from the opposite direction it is now. 20:52, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the two legs furthest from us. 20:59, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Ugh, this is so cruddy. 03:00, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 13:23, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry but theres a patch on the back where the shading is like not the same dark as the others? And i still think the shading on the tail needs to be defined Storm  &#9835;  13:37, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me Stormsong. 16:34, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Im gonna have to agree with storm here. I can see the light patch on the back and that shouldnt be there 20:15, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Balanced out back shading as best I could (though my computer screen doesn't really want to cooperate :c) and defined shading a tad more. 21:31, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Can you actually define the light on the paws farthest from us? The shading seems to be on the wrong side 21:51, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry. And add some more shading on the back of the haunch please :) 21:51, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Turns out highlights were leaking. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll re-upload later today~ 23:27, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I lied. 23:47, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

There's this odd streak of light on the midriff - mind getting rid of that? 23:02, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: Was that it? 05:17, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more? 01:36, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload 11:58, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Wonderful 13:57, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Hailstar (D) - For Approval
alright...GIMP makes him look a lot more blurred than he actualy is, I'm going to fix that right now as we speak. 20:17, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere (Unless that's part of the blur thing you mentioned)  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 20:19, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 20:25, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

define shading even more; i can barely tell it's got any shading <span style="">20:39, 09/8/2015

Re-uploaded: 20:41, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and the earpink. 20:54, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded: 21:14, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file? Also, the shading is leaking everywhere, and he seems too dark... 23:24, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Burntclaw, I'd love the file. Sorry you guys, this definitely isn't my best at all, I've just been a little under the weather. 00:02, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Kill me. 02:14, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? nice. 13:03, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

On the back, there is a line of unshaded area before the shading. If you don't know what I mean I can try and explain it a little better. 23:00, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 11:33, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Shit I think i lost the file, but i'll attempt to search for it again. Although I'm p sure the base is #aeaeae. That's all you /really/ need from the file, tbh. (this isn't critique just a comment) 11:51, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the main body shading. 23:59, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a tad on the front leg closest to us. 06:14, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 14:02, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 18:09, September 11, 2015 (UTC)

Are highlights on the tail leaking a little into the hind paws, or is it just me? 02:58, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the front curved paw is out of place Storm  &#9835;  13:40, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 14:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Try putting the shading on the other side of the paw 14:56, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 00:21, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is now leaking onto the leg, and it's taken up the majority of the paw. Define the light on the paw please 00:35, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

whoops and can you also blur the earpink a tad more please, it looks too uniform right now 00:36, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on his right front leg 02:40, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I might redo the shading... 03:10, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more and define the light on the tail 12:31, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:19, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on his curved paw 19:45, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

I sent the file ^^ (i found it at Suzhou lmao) might you define the shading on the tail? 11:50, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: That's literally the best I can do with that paw. And thanks for the file burnt :) 23:14, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg closest to us 14:00, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Half Moon (Star) - For Approval
my beautiful child <span style="">20:22, 09/8/2015

...why does she get one of these? shes not in starclan. HotTeacher69 (talk) 20:27, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

jayce told me she got one (and reserved her for me, since i was on mobile / unable to access a comp, bless his soul) so ask him bc i honestly do not know?? <span style="">20:35, 09/8/2015

She's seen in StarClan at the end of PoS, therefore she gets one 22:07, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading above her right cheek. 01:40, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

i told icy this in chat but: theats her cheekbone, it's in the light; so it's like not supposed to be blurred; its actually a bit overblurred for my tastes. <span style="">01:54, 09/9/2015

That's...actually quite a bit too high to be her cheekbone... 13:12, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah i think winter is right. Feel your face. Is your cheekbone on your forehead? No its right to the side and below the eye. And yes i know its a cat and humans bonrs are different but do you really think a cats cheek is that high? Storm &#9835;  20:33, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

....first of all, I am not a child, do not speak to me like one. I misplaced the light on the face; there is no reason to speak to me like this, especially since I've been here, and doing chararts, for more than 4 years (much longer than you've been around on here). If you'd been patient, I was about to comment that yes, now that I'm more awake and can see better, I see that it's too high. whatever thooo. <span style="">20:39, 09/9/2015

ook.. blur the shading on the backside/shoulder area? <span style="">02:08 Thu Sep 10

Blur/smudge the shading on her main body? 13:08, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

thsiu is so beautiful,, can you smudge the earpink up a bit?? teach me how to shade like this. also ily <span style="">14:00 Sat Sep 12

Still working? 04:56, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Unfortunately, it's been a week without uploads. I must decline this ;; 01:19, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took over 05:25, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little? This is so amazing! 14:43, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks 01:19, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

One-eye (kit) - For Approval


This is my first one so.. yeah. And sorry if I messed anything up.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  01:50, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the white background? 01:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but how do I do that?

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  01:50, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Do you use Photoshop? I don't know anything else. 02:09, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

No I don't use it.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  04:17, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

This appears to be uploaded as a .jpg file. As a result, there will be a white background. Try converting it to a png. Also, what program do you use? 04:20, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

I tried to change it from jpg to png, but it wouldn't work. I use GIMP

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  04:39, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

File ==> Export ==> PNG. 05:26, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading seems a little pixelated, is that intended for mottling or something? Also, if the white background isn't budging after PNG-fication, select the white background with the Wand tool and, um, delete the selection. Make sure the tolerance is set so that the charart isn't selected~ Blur the earpink a bit too. This is nice, but there's always room for improvement :D 10:53, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded I fixed the shading, now how do I delete the white? there's no delete button that I can see.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  14:48, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Select the white background with the wand tool and tap 'delete' - should do the trick 15:46, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Where's the wand tool?

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  16:35, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

In GIMP (what you use, right?) it's one of the tools in the toolbox, towards the top of it - it looks like a magic wand and is called "Fuzzy Select Tool". As for the image can you define the shading a tad? Very pretty! 20:25, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded

 ~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~   21:45, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little bit more, please? 23:14, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  23:38, September 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit 04:10, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading a tad~ Also, try and blur earpink a little more? :3 13:59, September 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  02:21, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Aw, he's so cute. Mind defining the light on the back paw for me? 03:07, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Also, you know what you're doing so no reason why you shouldn't be promoted into an apprentice :D 03:08, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re uploaded. '''I had to delete your edt Foxy, It turned into the picture.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  13:30, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and back paw Storm  &#9835;  13:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded.

 ~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~   16:02, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Very nice! 12:30, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re uploaded.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  13:33, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down and blur the ear-pink a touch and smooth the shading on the tail; it looks a little blotchy 04:19, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

(I think it's my screen) I think I see some waste on the outside of the (our left) right ear. Correct me If I am wrong... ~Spotteh

Re uploaded.

~x XP at ch Fe at he rX x~  16:20, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

I'd say dull the ear pink a bit more and smoothe out the shading on the chest. Also, there's some waste above the tail and under the hind foot. She's so cute, great job! --ZootVine (talk) 13:58, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Pearnose (Star) ~ For Approval
I miss blurring I'll smooth out chest shading and perhaps thicken the dorsal stripe in the next upload if there's going to be one. don't tell me they don't match cuz I'll agree with it

Darken the stripes? 13:18, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs? 14:36, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry but this is a biiiiit too red to be dark brown 23:43, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Italicizing and repeating letter isn't gonna get your point across. Can you make the earpink a more dull color? 03:48, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

...I highly doubt that was Winter's intention. Define the shading on the belly region, please. 16:59, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

In a moment^^ I colorpicked off her med version and used highlights but I didn't on the legs and tail, so I guess I'll take out the highlights when I get GIMP. I think that'll solve the problems

re-ups

re-ups forgot dorsal stripe!

Define the shading on the tail. 17:28, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (W) ~For Approval
Here it is, finally finished!

Please don't align your images. Also, define the shading. 03:33, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

I was just about to do that xD

Reuploaded. Here.

I saw some waste.

Smudge/blur the earpink a bit, and make it a bit less bright. Also, smoothen out your highlights :] <span style="">03:54 Sun Sep 13

He needs to match this image http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/5/5f/Rabbitleap_%28TC%29.kit.png/revision/latest?cb=20150912210231 If not already matched. Ignores this if its invalid. --Dewsplash (talk) 03:58, September 13, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash 03:58, September, 13, 2015

Reuploaded.

Blur the ear pink 06:12, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading everywhere but the legs. Define the light on the legs. 12:26, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more. 17:07, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So beautiful.

Reuploaded again. Ugly earpink :P

Nice job! Can you blur the shading and highlights some more, and can you possibly dull the earpink to a paler color other than the bright pink it is now? If you need some more help, you can color pick from actual images of brown cats. 22:56, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm sorry if its not that pale.

Dull and blur the ear pink and smooth out the shading on the haunch; it's a bit blotchy 04:23, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the earpink a bit more pale. Also what tool do i use to smoothen out the shading. (I use pixlr btw)

If you decide to rejoin the project, I'll add you in as an apprentice. And as for the image, smooth out the shading 10:14, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink looks kinda neon, can you dull it down a bit? #ab4526 is a good color, I'd suggest you use that, but you don't have to. Just dull it down more, if you want. 10:26, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also, may I rejoin the project as an apprentice?

Smooth out the shading and blur the earpink? Also, remember to add a timestamp with your signature. 20:25:17 16 Sep 2015 (UTC)

How do I smoothen out the shading? PoppyShine 20:40, September 16, 2015

It looks to me like the shading is a lot redder than the main pelt. Maybe match it more? 15:02, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

To smooth out the shading, just blur it until it blends with the pelt more. 07:15, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you use a duller hue for your earpink, and smudge it more? You should reshape it a little, too - you should make it more, um, triangular? XD 08:32, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define shading on the front leg closest to us 08:32, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Sagewhisker (MCA) - For Approval
yeah <span style="">03:45 Sun Sep 13

Lighten the shading. perfect as always 03:48, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

uh actually I can't see the shading. but it could be my monitor 03:49, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Shading could be blurred tbh. If she lightens it people will be complaining about not being about to see it. 03:50, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Also, leangthen the whiskers. 04:08, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. foxy: i'm pretty sure it's your monitor, because i can see it just fine :] <span style="">20:54 Sun Sep 13

Define light on her shoulder^^ Also just suggesting maybe you can make the whiskers on the outside more "outgoing" if you know what I mean :P

I'm not seeing any light on her tail...care to add some? This is lovely, Splook. <span style="">23:12 Mon Sep 14

I haven't fixed the shading critiques just yet, but I reuploaded a version with longer whiskers. This is the longest I can do without enlarging the canvas. how's this look? <span style="">02:14 Tue Sep 15

define light on the legs and paws closest to use and define shading on the paws and legs farthest from us. 02:46, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. added a layer of highlights on those specified areas. highlights aren't the easiest to see on already white cats ;[ <span style="">02:58 Wed Sep 16

can you make the whiskers a bit straighter? they just tend to droop more gradually rather than right down. HotTeacher69 (talk) 10:20, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. <span style="">23:45 Thu Sep 17

Adderfang (A) ~ For Approval
What have I done. <span style="">18:28 Sun Sep 13

Smudge the stripes on his face a bit more? 18:33, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">20:11 Sun Sep 13

Define the shading. This is awesome. 22:54, September 13, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the shading just fine. 23:58, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

So... so I define it? <span style="">20:38 Tue Sep 15

I think the shading is fine. 01:38, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Defining it wouldn't hurt- I'm having trouble seeing it myself, honestly.

I think its fine so she shouldnt have to define it 12:16, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

It actually looks a little on the dark side to me. 14:38, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes themselves a bit- they appear to be a couple ticks darker on the other images. Also, Hawky, since it's two and two for the shading, do whatever you think you should do, whether it be define it or let it go, or even lighten it, as Princess suggests.

Rockfall (W) ~ For Approval
Okay, this is my first time doing a CA, so someone please give me some tips on what to do. :/

Ebs

Please dont align your images, and  blur the aerpink andwell as define the light on the back legs 03:00, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Hey, this is pretty good! Define the neck shading? 04:07, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch a bit. 12:03, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Wait, how do I not align an image Ebs

In source mode, delete the little part that says left or right in the image coding. i just did it for you :] Smooth out the back and leg shading a little more. <span style="">02:12 Tue Sep 15

Add or define the neck shading ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:14, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and add/define head shading. 20:27:59 16 Sep 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Wow, my PC glitched so i probs messed something up :( This better? Urk, positioning.... how can I fix it? Ebony Huo

Blur the earpink a tad more, and the neck shading still isn't that visible. Please lighten midriff shading too (ah deja vu) 08:29, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

White Tail (K) ~ For Approval
First project :) Qiute proud ( bramble said this looks like inverted Cloudstar) Nettlesky (talk) 05:08, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

This looks really good! Can you define the shading some more? 10:35, September 14, 2015 (UTC) Huh. I thought this was Sziri's. Anyways define ear pink a tad, I can barely see it. --Dewsplash (talk) 13:54, September 14, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash 13:54, September, 14, 2015

Well,Nettlesky didn,t put on a date so i thought i can reserve it for myself,but i don't think i did the good thing :/ 14:50, September 14, 2015 (UTC)

Even though it's her first project, but if you want it then sure. It's the rules.

If it's her first time, then add the date for her. She (and everyone else) should be entitled to one free pass.

Omg thank you! Can I re-add this on the current projects table? Nettlesky (talk) 11:39, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

You're very welcome, and I've already added it back for you. Apologies, Sziri, but if we allow it for everyone else, Nettlesky is no exception. And instead of "For Evaluation", we're going to make this a full on "For Approval", and make you an apprentice. As for comments, might you brighten up the white on the paws?

I luv your image too ^^ But can i ask someone to reserve Stone the rogue for me pls?In my mobile it don't let me reserve chararts ;p 15:48, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, like the one made on Black Ear. Since the cat's name is White Tail, maybe the tail could be pure white? I'm definitely not telling you to do that, only if you want to! <span style="">02:44 Wed Sep 16

Re upped @Splook, I was just going to do that! ;) and thanks everyone! Nettlesky (talk) 03:39, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Did you brighten up the white on the paws like I asked? I don't see much of a difference, and I still think they could be brightened up a lot.

Define light on the tail maybe?

Could you possibly define your light source? The tail and hindpaw is telling me it's coming from the -->, while the legs say it's from the <--. 17:26, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Rockfall (App) ~ For Approval
All colours from warrior 02:57, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Expand and blur the shading.

Define the light on the head. 20:17, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-up oh great. Uglyness has reached its point 20:24, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Ooh this is really nice! Could you sorta delete the lighting on the end of the spine, because I don't think the light would hit that area as well. Ebs

I dont use Highlights. There arent any Highlights on the tail. Its just the shading on the tail and the fur colour. 22:31, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

She's referring to the unshaded part at the end of the spine. But it's fine tho. Couold you blur the shading there? 01:26, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

re-up tfw you lost the file but is to determined to get it CBA'd you re-did the file :P 02:38, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the shading on the butt 12:13, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

theres nothing wrong with having shading there. HotTeacher69 (talk) 14:52, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Actually there is. It doesnt make sense with that light source. 18:01, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Are we seriously going to fight over a light source? It's fine. Many other apprentice images have this source or similar and there's no need to start a debate over it.

Lighten the shading a little? 22:47, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 02:19, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Stone (Ro) ~ For Approval
Fifty shades of brown.Thanks Jayce for reserving ^^ 19:46, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading a little? Nice job! 20:20, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Heheheh this is making me think of Pinestar again  Define light oh the front leg closest to us?

Re-ups Thanks:) 16:50, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Doestar (W) ~ For Approval
I know I'm not a kit (or in the project yet, for that matter), but I wanted to play it safe, so I put 'For Evaluation'. Besides, it's my first official project.

I don't feel I quite did it justice (Doestar is so pretty, both in charart and name), and going from front-view to side-view cuts off a lot of facial marking, but otherwise I'm pretty satisfied. All colors have been picked from the leader charart. --ZootVine (talk) 20:33, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

first dont align your images and fix your light source on hauch, beautiful 20:36, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed said light source; looks much better now. --ZootVine (talk) 21:01, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Wow, this is gorgeous. Blur the chin shading a tad. <span style="">22:22 Tue Sep 15

Re-uploaded. Tried to give the illusion of cheekbones. Tell me if I succeeded! I'm experimenting with the shading. --ZootVine (talk) 22:41, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Oh my, this is beautiful 0.0 if you do ever join the project, you will be added as an apprentice, so I changed the heading. 23:17, September 15, 2015 (UTC)

Personally, I think you can remove the shading on the belly/chest area^^ Omg omg omg this is so pretty *scratches the wall*

Re-uploaded. Lightened the shading on the chest and added some more shoulder shading, but now the chest marking looks gray. I'm off to fix that. --ZootVine (talk) 15:31, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Much better~ --ZootVine (talk) 15:34, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the neck shading just a tiny bit? It looks like there's just...this dark line or something. Sorry for being blunt; I don't feel well. x.x

Re-uploaded. Don't worry, you were fine. Hope you get well soon! Is this better? --ZootVine (talk) 17:21, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Rainfur (TC) (Q) ~ For Approval
dong ding HotTeacher69 (talk) 13:47, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

The color of these seems yellower than the warrior, but I'm not sure if you could change that, so, define the shading on the face a bit? 14:36, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

i think it may be the shading colour i used....ill look into it. HotTeacher69 (talk) 15:15, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded any better? HotTeacher69 (talk) 15:30, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Do you mind defining the belly shading a tad? 17:24, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded HotTeacher69 (talk) 18:42, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading 07:14, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded only did it a little, since its supposed to look well, furry. HotTeacher69 (talk) 10:04, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Early Settler blanks ~ For Approval
thanks 2 the gays that uploaded for me :* i know they're way too big but can someone like recommend a way to make them smaller that doesn't pixelate them?? ty <span style="">14:11 Wed Sep 16

Maybe make the long-haired's tail a bit fluffier? These are so awesome! 14:35, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding some tufts of fur to the back of the front legs/elbows on the longfurred. Cats normally have longer fur there regardless, but it would be even more prominent on a long furred cat. Also, try to make the tails a tad more.. rounded and soft?? It has a few sharp edges here and there, so if you could soften that it would be great. You did wonderfully on these! 16:22, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

For the back legs, do you mind trying to make the femur...protude, a little, if you get what I mean? if you don't feel free to ask - sorry, my brain is fried. 17:42, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you fix the paws, they look a bit off 18:00, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the image smaller? 20:04, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know of any way to make them smaller without pixelating them - just make them smaller, use whatever tool on whatever program you have to harden the lines, if possible, and if that makes sense, and then go in manually and make sure the whole lineart is two pixels wide. Definitely make the long-haired tail way, way fluffier, as well as the cheeks, neck fur, and belly fur, look at the queen blank to see what I'm talking about. The far back leg (behind the cat) is bent way too sharply, and the toes should be facing straight to the right, not turned towards us. The paw on the back leg closest to us looks like it's lifted in the air, and that wouldn't work since the front leg on the same side is definitely lifted in the air, the cat wouldn't be able to balance like that; flatten that paw so it looks like it's set firmly against the ground. The lifted front leg, the paw looks like it has too many joints - either get rid of that bend just above the paw and have it held straight up with the toes held out forward, or bend the paw back. Also, your perspective seems off; the far front leg is much longer than both back legs. Make sure the paws on the same side of the body is even with each other on the ground. I apologize for the wall of text. I was trying to be as specific as I could. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:32, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

The tail looks a tad uneven- it looks a bit... Bumpy in some places? 02:30, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

The paws look a little thick too me idk 15:07, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Harepounce (Q) - For Approval
Solids without texture - my worst failures. 23:36, September 16, 2015 (UTC)

The light source is lop sided on the most unvisible leg (Behind the stomach). And could ou smothen out the shading on the face? Lovely overall <3 00:59, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out overall please 01:52, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using a one px brush? i find it hard to make the shading look smooth and nice with it and it takes a very long time in order for the shading to not look uniform. Using a size 10 bristle brush smoothes out the shading and gives the same furry affect- this is just a suggestion, not that you have to ^^. 02:28, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

I use a small brush like that for my shading, and I personally prefer it to a larger brush, it gives the shading a sharp, fur-like texture. So I personally think the shading is fine and doesn't need to be smoothed out. Define the tail shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:01, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I smoothed out the shading as best as I could, because tbh it did look hard-edged. I also made the other shading fixes. 20:40, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the facial shading 06:29, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:20, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Dew Petal (ki) ~ For Approval
she smol 00:41, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

darken her tail. HotTeacher69 (talk) 00:45, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe light the shading on the tail and define the light on the tail itself. 01:00, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten her just a tad? Not too much at all though.--Dewsplash (talk) 03:04, September 17, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, September, 17, 2015, 03:04

I think I see a bit of light on the left back paw where it shouldn't be. Add more shading to that paw?

@Dew I think the darkness is fine, since she's supposed to be dark grey. 16:34, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-up  01:28, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

There's a dot on one of her ears on the bottom that shouldn't be there and define nosepink as well, it's looking like the rest of her pelt. --Dewsplash (talk) 01:32, September 18, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 03:32, September, 18, 2015

Poppydawn (Ki) - For Approval
mew c: 06:56, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs? 07:13, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

She's adorable~ Define earpink (I can barely see it, but maybe it's just my monitor) and chest shading. 08:42, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the back paw? Cutie 16:33, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Switch the leg shading on the --> front leg. With this source, it should be on the same side as the other leg if the light is coming from the left. 01:42, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:47, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading? 08:24, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Daisytoe (Ki) ~ For Approval
Colours from queen. omg I found the reason she's called Daisytoe! XD

Don't forget to sign :3 this is cute, define the light on the back paw? 07:58, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload whoops. 21:47, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Hawkheart (MCA) - For Approval
He's back, folks. Comments? 14:17, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Have you forgotten to fill in the nose, or is the nose supposed to be grey? Lovely job. 16:32, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

There appears to be a lot more brown on all his other images. 18:28, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Just wondering, why are there random red dots on the herbs? 06:25, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Heronwing (TC) (K) ~ For Approval
All colors from the warrior. 15:57, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading? 16:31, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

The shading appears flat overall. Define it please 18:27, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  22:37, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Moss Tail (Ro) ~ For Approval
16:31, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten him, he looks black 23:09, September 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups this is as far as I'm willing to lighten him because otherwise I'll be told he's not dark enough 15:13, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly don't think dark brown needs to be that dark, but whatever. I'm having trouble seeing the light source, could you define it? 15:16, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Swiftbreeze (TC) (K) ~ For Evaluation
Swiftbreeze as a kit!

This is my first one, hehe ^^

Sagestream (talk) 04:25, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images. Also, you had to reserve this on the table, which I did for you. As for the image, smooth out the shading. Also, remove the white background. The title should also say "under evaluation". 06:27, September 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add more tabby markings to the haunch and brighten/enlargen earpink. Darken the overall charart too, it's a little too light. Oh, also, the middle tabby marking on Swiftie's forehead should be a little thinner than the others, in reference to her StarClan resident image. Good job! 08:22, September 18, 2015 (UTC)