Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 12

Brightflower (Q) - Approved


My first queen (I think...) Constructments?  Sandy Talk! 12:36, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing Sandy i think she needs a small black patch on her chest.User:Stonestar 13:45, July 19 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Stonestar. I reuploaded her with an extra patch. Anything else?  Sandy Talk! 08:51, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks PERFECT i think she's ready for approval!--StonestarStonestar 13:43, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Maybe put one more black patch on her left frint leg.Stonestar 17:31, 20 July 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

(M) - Could you put on one more small balck patch on her belly, near the other ones (but not in the center of them.) It looks sort of ab-normal right now with them all grouped around in a circle like that. Mosswisker&amp;Stealthfire 19:40, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe lighten the shading a little; there's a big differenece between it and the regular black color. -- Bramble My Realm 21:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. The second image is the next level down of shading I can get. If it's too light then there isn't any in between. Sorry Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:54, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

I like the second shading job better, personally. It just needs to be blurred on the edges. The other shading just seems like there was black paint on her gray pelt. -- Bramble My Realm 15:56, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I blurred it in and made the background transparent. Anything else? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:05, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Maybe put a small black patch on her left front leg.Stonestar 20:15, 23 July 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Stonestar! I'm so sorry you had to say that twice. I didn't see it the first time. :( Here, better? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:57, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Its ok if i was a senior warrior i would approve it ut i cant.:( Stonestar 16:48, 24 July 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

I like this. The patch on the head is a bit unnatural, though. Sparrowsong 17:29, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Thank you Stonestar. Sparrowsong: I don't really get what you mean by unnatural so I changed the shape a bit. I can't move it completely else I'd have to start the whole image again as for some reason it won't let me get rid of it completely. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:48, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

It looks great now.  Sparrowsong ( talk! ) 17:36, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I corrected the file upload so the right file shows here. Anything else? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:16, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks great. Approval after comments? ;) -- Bramble My Realm 23:20, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Approved. -- Bramble My Realm 00:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) - Approved
My first Charat in a while. What do you think? -- Dawnfeather talk! 00:52, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfoot looks pretty good,But I think the nose should be colored like,light pink,or light red.Other than that,good image! --Firepelt 01:52, 26 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

No, it shouldn't. We color the noses black. Dawn, beautiful pic. G B 57 01:56, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, he looks great, except he seems to me more a pale brown or tan color than pale ginger with darker ginger legs. Make him slightly more gingerish, and he'll look great. -- Bramble My Realm 02:03, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

He probably looks more pink now... Oh well, if anyone agrees with me I'll go back and try again. -- Dawnfeather talk! 09:50, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

This looks good to me. I see no problems. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:01, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree. Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 23:17, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. -- Bramble My Realm 00:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)