Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Birchstar (RC)for approval
My first leader and my first tabby. Comments? --Spottedwing 00:42, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Here are a few things: It mostly just needs shading. The ear pink looks fine, and so does most of the tabby stripes. Otherwise, I think it looks good. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:16, September 12, 2009 (UTC)
 * Needs shading. If it's there, I can't see it.
 * The nose pink is too bright, it's more of a hot pink rather than just a pink. Try to lighten it some. But from the pictures I was looking at on Google images, brown cats tend to have either brown or black noses, depending on whether they're multi-colored. Try changing it to just a lighter shade of brown from the color of the fur.

The tabby stipes need to be longer in most cases and more varied. Add shading and blend it well. Lighten the nose pink. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:34, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image. Made the tabby stripes longer, fixed nose and ear pink, and added shading. Is there anything else? --Spottedwing 02:40, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Still needs thicker and darker shading. Then blend it for natural transitions. As for the stripes - make them less regular. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:36, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

What do you meen by regular?--Spottedwing 02:27, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

um... regular. i'll try and think of another way to describe it lol. bear with me. Make the different lengths, shapes and sizes. That would make them less regular. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:29, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Made the tabby stripes longer and darker. Added more shading. I really don't know what to think of it. Is it better? Worse? --Spottedwing 00:54, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the tabby stripes a bit more.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:39, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Also, more shading is needed. Thicken it slightly and then blend. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 15:04, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I'll get to her as soon as I can. My life has been busy since school started, so I'll try to get to her during the weekend. --Spottedwing 16:14, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Thickened the shading and the tabby stripes. --Spottedwing 19:33, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --Spottedwing 17:28, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Your tabby stripes are too few and far between. They also are too thick and they all look alike. Put in some more and vary their length and look; I know warriors are a different pose but you can look at the approved tabbies for reference if there are no leader tabbies approved. Your shading also needs to be increased, slightly thickened, and the transition then needs to be blended thoroughly. -- Bramble -san  23:00, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Redid the tabby stripes. --Spottedwing 01:03, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

I like them now.Minnowclaw 01:40, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading and blend it in.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 14:46, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Added shading on her left side and I blended it in as much as I could. How does she look? --Spottedwing 22:49, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --Spottedwing 21:22, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - She needs some shading under her chin. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:39, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --Spottedwing 18:53, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Move it up so it's right against the chin line. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:28, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --Spottedwing 21:28, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Wasn't really liking the neck shading, so I blended it in more. How does she look? --Spottedwing 01:37, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading.Minnowclaw 00:58, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

I'll get to her as soon as I can. It's homecoming week and its making me busy. Please don't decline. --Spottedwing 20:32, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? Wow I say 'Hows this?' alot. --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 20:09, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Teal; background:Navy; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Teal; ">Rainwhisker 09 21:02, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Done! How does she look? --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 01:10, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good. Just a few things left. Add a few more tabby stripes on her haunch, but be careful to make it not looked cluttered in that area. Thicken and then thoroughly blend her shading; the shading on Cloudstar is a good example. Lighten her ear pink just a touch, and make sure they are triangular and blended. Add some tabby stripes and put shading on the belly area inbetween the forelegs and again blend the shading thoroughly. Put a few slightly varied colors of the same base eye color in the eye, to make it look more life-like. Not to boast, but you can use my fursona on my user page for an example. A few darks, a few lights, and a saturated pixels. Be careful on her neck shading; don't make it too thick, and make sure to blur it hard. More shading around her head; forehead, cheeks, etc. Again blur. Add some more tabby markings on her tail, as well. -- Bramble -san  02:44, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Added more tabby stripes. Fixed the eyes, did all I could to the shading without messing up the tabbystripes, added shading and tabby stripes to the belly, added face shading. Did I miss anything? --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 01:03, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

All the shading is a little too light.Minnowclaw 12:44, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 15:53, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the neck is good ow, but on the legs and back and chest it still needs blending more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:20, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading. --<font color="Navy" style="background:Violet">Spottedwing 22:27, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Birdy - For Approval
Yep, I finally did her. Constructive criticism is welcome, and remember, if I don't respond right away, even for a week, DON'T remove. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 17:27, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There are dark gray dots inside of the middle patch, and I can't see any shading. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:40, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks... circular. -- Rain whisker 09 23:41, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

GB, I don’t know how much allowance I can give you… the image can’t just remain here while others are declined when they aren’t worked on in a week. It isn’t fair to others. I’ll give you two weeks at the most; after that I don’t think it can stay up any more if you haven’t worked on it. -- Bramble -san  21:04, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

I agree: two weeks is fair because he can only get on every other week. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:04, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Back. God, I hate life when it makes you busy. Anyway, I'll get on this before the weekend ends, but I have other stuff I need to catch up on, as well. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:01, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Better? I blurred the darker spots in. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:45, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, that's better. The ear pink needs to be slightly less circular though (I know it's hard with the kits but make it a bit taller) and a less purpley colour. Then darken all the shading. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:02, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

I forgot to do the ear pink. I'll get to it this weekend. Ugh, sorry I'm gone so often. And thanks to my dad's new stupid work schedule, it's going to get slightly worse. Grrr. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 02:45, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry to hear that, Grocery :(. On the image: it's great, but could you darken the eyes a bit? They are so light I can't really tell what color they are. Sparrowsong 00:29, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I've improved her. How is she? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 21:56, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Icewhisker- For Approval
*Shrugs* A minor character. Comments? <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 18:08, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

The thing that immediately strikes me is that it needs shading!!! Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:02, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 20:10, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading, and there's a bit of burred linart on his forehead. Very good though!  HA WK FI RE98  21:18, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks :) I'll go fix the lineart and shading <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 21:58, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 22:10, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Needs it's shading thickened immensely and blended. Ear pink could be toned down, but it mostly needs blurred some. ^^--<font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 00:36, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 21:09, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Better, but go back, it looks like you blurred the line art or added black marks.Minnowclaw 12:12, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be more... intense Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 21:10, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the lineart. But Sandy, i don't get what you mean by "intense" <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 19:01, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not Sandy, but I think she meant that it needs to be darker. (Sandy corect me if I'm wrong.)Minnowclaw 14:14, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Well yes, that is kind of what I mean. It needs to be not just darker but a little thicker and blur it really well so it actually looks like shadows on his pelt. Some good examples of how the shading needs to look are Shadepelt and Rushtail's image which is currently up for approval. (I can't think of any more off the top of my head, sorry) It's not exactly just darker; it needs to look like a part of the pelt. I really hope that made some sense. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:05, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Done. I tried to fix it... <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 13:30, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

There should be more shading on the legs, and you might want to add a tiny highlight to the top of the herbs. -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 00:24, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Use-For-Whatever Blanks


I got bored and made these. I figured that there were reserves on most blanks, so I'm just offering these up to use for whatever. If there's an extra blank needed for something, and whatnot. I'd like to see what everyone thinks they should be, because I've got no idea. Suggestions on editing welcome. ;3 --Sandiwolf 02:46, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

do we have To-Be blanks? or something? they should have whiskers :) and maybe a line going in from the nick? I'm newsh so... Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 04:48, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

And I think the eye is a bit big, maybe the cat is to big as well? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:27, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

I think that the only blanks that aren't reserved by anyone are softpaw blanks. Ice throat  21  16:36, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Add some fur to the cat, or else it looks flat. -- Pan das ong <font color="white" style="background:silver">Panda-Love 16:40, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

I think Minnowclaw has the soft-paw blanks reserved. Maybe they could be kit-mothers?

Oh and yes they need whiskers. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Teal; background:Navy; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Teal; ">Rainwhisker 09 21:14, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, I forgot that Minnowclaw had the softpaw's reserved. But these look too small to be kit-mothers. They look more like young cats. I don't think there are any other blanks that aren'y reserved besides the kit-mothers, though... Ice throat  21  22:29, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

I can add whiskers to them. If there's nothing you can do with them now, you could use them for something later. More cats might show up in the future series.--Sandiwolf 19:42, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Sandiwolf, this can't just be Use for whatever blanks. You need to chose something or take them down. What about sharp claws?Minnowclaw 22:59, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Or cave-guards, unless someone else reserved them already? I could check if someone reserved the sharpclaw blanks right now. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Teal; background:Navy; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Teal; ">Rainwhisker 09 01:31, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Shoot, sorry. There is already something up for that.Minnowclaw 22:49, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

I saw no rules against it, Minnowclaw. Correct me if I am wrong. But, I can take them down if there is no use for them. --Sandiwolf 17:08, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

No, your not wrong. There is no rule agianst it in my mind, but think about it, if it gets approved and we don't have anything for them, what do we do?Minnowclaw 12:10, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Echo has the sharpclaws up, and Ice said they're too small to be kit-mothers, and the only thing left is cave-guards, which I'm not sure someone had reserved. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Gray;">Hallow's Eve 09 17:44, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Well there is a point in time I'm sure that we all will be looking for a time to maybe to improve some of our blanks. Maybe you can start looking ahead in that...-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 19:00, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

I withdrew my sharpclaws... these could be sharpclaws, if you want. -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 13:34, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

On the shorthaired versions, the lineart behind the ear doesn't connect. Its too straight. These would look good as sharpclaws, though.--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;cyan; background:red; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;">♥Shadowedheart♥ 19:49, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

They look like they've been lifted up from the front, if you know what I mean... maybe make the front legs longer, so that they touch the ground. -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 00:26, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

They look very dog-like. Try making them a bit more delicate: smaller paws, less pointy muzzle and you need to sort the tails so they look more feline too. If these are going to be sharpclaws you need to replace 'Use-for-whatever blanks' with 'sharpclaw blanks' Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:08, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Tigerpaw (SC) (A)- For Approval
Not much to say, I made him look like his kit version the best I could.  HA WK FI RE98  16:05, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Nice job! The ear pink's too bright for a brown cat though, and it needs blurred more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:18, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Tigerstar doesn't have a kit version.... his stripes look much different than what you have here. -- Bramble -san  18:31, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Unless you meant this to be Tigerpaw (SC) in which case the stripes do look similar, but Bramble's right: Tigerstar's images have classic markings. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:52, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Dangit! *bangs head on computer* I can't do classic tabby. I might have to withdraw this.  HA WK FI RE98  19:06, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Wait! Maybe I can change him to Tigerpaw (SC)! That would work, for Tigerpaw doesn't have a apprentice version.  HA WK FI RE98  19:08, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, Hawkey, it should be fine as Tigerpaw. But the ear pink still needs to be darker. Ice throat  21  19:44, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Wait! I saw where Sparrowsong has Tigerpaw (A) (SC) reserved. Ice throat  21  19:54, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Excuse me, *walks outside and screams* Okay, I will talk to Sparrowsong.  HA WK FI RE98  20:09, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

She said I can use it. :)  HA WK FI RE98  22:12, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. For the actual image, the ear pink needs darkened to a reddish color. There are plenty of approved dark-brown cats that are great examples. Ice throat  21  01:53, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Blur tabby stripes.Minnowclaw 23:21, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are fine. I've blended them the best I can, their just dark is all. Reuploaded.  HA WK FI RE98  00:10, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink redder and more... what's the word... I can't think so I'll say apart of the part. Sorry that I can't think of something better.Minnowclaw 12:07, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

That makes no sense whatsoever. Anyway, Hawky, if you make the ear pink just a bit more red, I'd be glad to approve this. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 17:30, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:Orange; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Black;"> Ghostfire Happy Halloween! 23:01, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Aww, he's so cute! Just darken the shading a tad and he should be perfect. Sparrowsong 21:50, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Sloefur (D) - For Approval
There is shading, but it's hard to see...and what you can see it really messy...should I thicken/darken it, and blur it some more? I've blurred it over and over again, but Pixlr isn't doing much for blurring... Ice throat  21  00:39, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

I'll add more shading soon...I should be able to get to it today or tomorrow... Ice throat  21  02:11, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Like you said your self, shading. It's easier with a black cat to do shading with the dodge tool, but if your more comfortable using the burn don't listen to me. This is also very dark. I know that it's not black becuase if I tilt me CP I can see the line art. But lighten it up a bit.Minnowclaw

I've got a busy next couple of days, and I won't be able to get on very much. I'll try to work on Sloefur when I can, even if I don't have enough time to reupload it, so please don't decline this. Ice throat  21  17:24, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I found that it was a lot easier to just start over than to try and edit it, because the shading that I did have was really messy and hard to work with. So...I know that the shading needs blended, but Pixlr doesn't want me to be able and blend it all very much...I mainly can't get the shading on the hind leg right. Any suggestions for what I can do about the shading on the hind leg, as well as on the midriff? Also, sorry I haven't worked on this in a while. Ice throat  21  00:46, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

I'll try to lighten the shading soon... (the shading looks too dark, right?) Ice  throat  21  00:54, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to lighten the shading. But if I lighten the entire charart, then the shading gets ruined. And I tried to blur the shading as much as possible, but it's blurred to the max in pixlr. So...suggestions? Ice throat  21  21:40, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

No, this is great. Comments before approval? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:51, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

This may be my screen resolution but the shading looks a little blotchy... can you blend a little more? Apart from that tis good. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:30, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

I've tried to blur it some more, but it was basically already blurred to the max. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 20:56, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (W)
this is Whiteclaw. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:29, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

She is way too dark.Minnowclaw 14:05, October 12, 2009 (UTC)


 * Ok hehe he is way to dark XD so make he light. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 14:56, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

ok hope this is ok. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:13, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs fixed... Ice throat  21  21:44, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot to specify on how to fix the eye, as well as mention a couple of other things, so, I'll say them now. The ear pink needs to be more triangular along with the shape of the ear, blurred some more, and also needs to be more of a reddish color rather than a pink color. And for the eye, go to for a diagram of how to fix the eye. Also, the transition between black and white with the paw needs blurred some more, and add some shading on the hind leg. And maybe run the dodge tool over the tail a couple of times, so it's not too much darker than the color of about the middle of the shading. (Sorry, I know it's a lot, and if I didn't explain enough please say so!) Ice  throat  21  23:58, October 12, 2009 (UTC)


 * OK....done. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:11, October 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reddish, not purplish. Go to the red section, not up by where the purple and hot pink section is. Also make it a little fuller and less slanted. -- Bramble -san  02:22, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

well it's red I don't like red ear...did I miss things? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:40, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart at the bottom of the right forepaw looks thin compared to the rest of the charart. Can you thicken it? I think you erased some of it while you were coloring it in. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Gray;">Hallow's Eve 09 21:31, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

There needs to be a lot more shading; I can barely see any. -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 00:27, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

I can see some shading, but it's been blended in a lot. Add some more where it's needed, and where you already have shading, sharpen it a little, make it stand out a teeny bit more. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 21:58, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Fallowtail- For Approval
Wasn't home for a few days.-- Darkhallows My den 10:49, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Beutiful Darky!Minnowclaw 14:06, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

I agree, she's wonderful! But, there seems to be a couple light colored pixels on her far cheek and the nose needs to be pink. Also, the ear pink seems to be more circular than triangular. Fix these, and she might be approved! --Hawktalon 19:35, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Fix'd.-- Darkhallows My den 12:49, October 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The eyes look... strange. Look at some of the approved queen's eyes. Then she should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:34, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Vinestar- For Approval
Poor Honeyfur. All she can draw are leader Charcats. =P Oh, well. What do you think of him? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:15, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice, Honeyfur! :) Maybe thicken and darken the shading a bit. -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 01:05, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

And darken shading. -- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:14, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (Ki) ~ For Approval


This is the best image I have EVER, EVER, EVER, EEVEERRR done!!! What do you guys think of Spottedkit? (Sorry about my abcenses. And Yes, they are school related.) -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 21:22, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

She's absolutely gorgeous. Only thing I see, is that the ear pink needs to be more inside the ear. It looks like it's on her forehead. :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:Orange; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Black;"> Ghostfire Happy Halloween! 21:43, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! And the ear pink looks like the ginger on the forehead... I'll fix it. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:46, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There's a gray patch above her ears. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:30, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed and Reuploaded. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 21:20, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Not meaning to be a downer, but shouldn't she look more like her medicine cat version? -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 00:23, October 19, 2009 (UTC)


 * shrugs* Dunno how to make her look more like her medicine cat version. I think she'll be fine; depends on what Bramble thinks. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:05, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Oh, wow this is great! It looks so cool! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 16:51, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

I really like this version as it is, but as the medicine cat version was approved first, we should probably change it to match that version. Unless you ask Shimmersong if you can edit her medicine cat image slightly. If you just want to change this, then make the brown patches paler, with some dark gray fur around the right eye. -- Bramble -san  01:59, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Stealthfire. :) As for the changes; I'll see what I can do... -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 23:30, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Redtail (Kit) - For Approval
Let's try this again I worked on the muzzle but not sure on what exactly more that I can do to it unless I make it bigger. Anymore suggestions and this time I will work hard to not let him go to waste like last time.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 03:53, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! I honestly don't see anything wrong. :) Great job! -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 13:33, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any shading on the tail, but that might just be me. Other than that, great job, Shim! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:08, October 18, 2009 (UTC)


 * I made the tail darker to show that its behind him. Do you guys think I should at least add a light spot or keep him how he is?-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 19:03, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know about anyone else, but I never imagined him as being tortie and white. Do we have a book reference that he had any white fur? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:55, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Isn't it kind of late to challenge that now after I've already made his approved deputy image? Not to be sounding edgy, it just bugs me how someone likes to point something out after one of the images before has already been done. Then the two just won't match and that wouldn't make any sense.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 01:36, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

I can't agree with Sandy becuase I picture him brown. Shim-Shim I'm not telling you to make him brown. I think that he's fine the way he is.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:13, October 20, 2009 (UTC)


 * Oh duh. Just ignore me, seriously. That's what comes when I try and make comments when I should be doing something else: I don't bother to check up on my facts first. Really truly sorry Shim, for some reason it slipped my mind that we already have a deputy version. The two match perfectly so ignore me. =/ Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:30, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Duskfur- (For Approval)
Echomist saw that I made this, and said I should put this up. How is it?

As for the image, gorgeous. There's just one problem; is Brindleclaw the first image that you ever put up for approval on here? If she is, you have to wait until she gets approved before you can post another image. Sorry, I forgot to tell you that... -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 13:58, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for tellingme, I'll wait then. :)--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;cyan; background:red; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:cyan;">♥Shadowedheart♥ 14:06, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Here, I put that it's temporarily withdrawn, because this pic is beautiful, and I don't want it completely withdrawn. When your other pic gets approved, put "For Approval" back at the top of this section. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 15:31, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Now that this is back up for approval, I'll comment on it. Beautiful, I can see nothing wrong. Great job Shadowedheart! Icethroat21 Enter at risk 21:12, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Yeah, it looks awesome! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:35, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

It looks a little bit camoish.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:12, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Camoish? I don't think I follow. Please Describe.-- ♥Sha dow edh eart♥  23:56, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

There's nothing wrong with a cat like her looking a bit like camo. Shadowedheart, if you could tidy up where you smeared the color outside of the tail (towards the middle-left of the tail), I'd be glad to approve this. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 22:01, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

REuploaded : Fixed smears-- ♥Sha de♥ <font color="#d8bfd8">Meow/<font color="#008000">Prey 23:54, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Q) - For Approval
Finally I got her up! She took forever to do xD.-- Darkhallows My den 15:56, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow, there are no words to describe the pure awesomeness of this pic! Just a few things. One, there are a few white pixels in several places. Two, she needs ear pink. Three, several places seem to be.... blue, like on her tail. Three, there is a strait, unblurred line next to the tabby M that needs to be taken out. Finally, her hind paw facing toward us is a different brown than the rest of her body, and needs tabby stripes. Then she should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:25, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - So cool! It looks great to me, but I don't really do charcat that much, so don't listen to me. Listen to Moss. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 16:54, October 19, 2009 (UTC)


 * Mouth drops open* O my god Darky you have to teach me how to do that!-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:10, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

I made her a little more brown all over, got rid of the blue (I hope!) and the white spots. I meant to get this up sooner, but my darn internet was down. -- Darkhallows My den 13:40, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Graypool (Elder) - For Approval
My first elder! Just so you know, the description said she had patchy fur so I guessed that meant she had a couple of bald spots here and there. That's what those pink thingies are. Constructments? (P.S., Check out my new siggie :D) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple; ">Hawktalon Talk 16:39, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Good job. I'm not gonna say beautiful, because Graypool isn't exactly a pretty cat, but excellent job! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 16:44, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Very good! But on the patches, take out the lineart on the bottem of them and then blur the pink and gray together, and see how that looks. It might make it look more natural. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:21, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, GB ^^! Mosswhisker, I did what you said, but I didn't take out all the lineart on the bottem of the patches because they looked, well, weird when I did. Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple; ">Hawktalon Talk 19:31, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you could make like a weird light pink, but not to light like those pinkish grays instead? The bright pink looks kind of unnatural in my oppinion.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 19:51, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed it, but it won't reupload the new image, only the current one. I think my computer has a mental disorder *has a computer that frequently does not work properly* --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple; ">Hawktalon Talk 00:19, October 19, 2009 (UTC

Reuploaded - It works now :D. Stupid computer, work for meh! Anyway, I lightened the... skin pink, lol. Comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple; ">Hawktalon Talk 00:23, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Crowfeather (App) - For Approval
Hereeeeeeeeeeeeee's Crowfeather as that annoying little apprentice when we first met him. Personally I loved his snobbish personality ^_^ and spunk. You know he was determined to do anything.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 19:09, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! I don't see anything wrong. Great job! :) -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 20:47, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Same here, and I completely agree with you about Crowpaw! He's awesome! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 16:56, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Great job, Shimmerpool! Darken the ear pink to a more reddish color, blur the highlights some more, and it should be ready! And I agree with you and Stealthfire, Crowpaw's awesome! Icethroat21 Enter at risk 21:01, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks gray. Try making it more pink.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:09, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ashfoot (De) - For Approval


Okay, so I'm starting at the letter A and working my way down I think ^_^ It's my new plan of action. Ashfoot was first so here she is i her most current form. =) Constructments please? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:07, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

She's fabulous! :D Maybe just blur the shading a tad. -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 20:46, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Good. But the highlights could be blurred more. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:Orange; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Black;"> Ghostfire Happy Halloween! 23:57, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. There are no highlights Hawkey, but I blended the shading the best I could. I don't think the blur tool will work any more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:29, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs blurred a tad bit more, because there's too hard of a line. Have you tried using a lower percent (somewhere below 50) highlight (on midtones/highlights) on the edge of the shading to make it a color in between the shading and the pelt, and then blurring it? Icethroat21 Enter at risk 21:06, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

There will always be some sort of line no matter how much bluring you use. Also, darken the shading more.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:08, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, well I've taken your advice Icethroat and given it a go. The image on the right is the new one. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 14:48, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

It looks a bit...rough. Try adding white highlights slightly and blur, sometimes that may be all it takes. ♥Sha de♥ <font color="#d8bfd8">Meow/<font color="#008000">Prey 20:21, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

This reminds me why I avoid grey cats... Anyway, I reuploaded over the original file name now. Better? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:04, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Screech(To-be) -for approval


Yup, Screech, Pebble' s brother ...Constructments?--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> ☆Pebble☆ X3 01:29, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! Amazing! The only thing wrong is that between the hind legs, there's a gap that's colored in dark gray - it should probably be white, or transparent, like the background. -- Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 12:24, October 19, 2009 (UTC).

Great job, Bracken! All I can see is what Echomist said, and that something happened to the lineart on the eye. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 21:17, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Just one other thing - if you look on his page, is says that he has a black pelt. It might just be my computer, but this pic looks like a dark gray rather than black. Darken the pelt color a bit (I'd recommend using the burn tool, biggest size, and just running over the image once or twice to make it darker.) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Teal">Talk/<font color="2A417D">Contribs 16:45, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

No your not wroung Echo. It does look gray.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:06, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I thought I had Screech reserved? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Gray;">Hallow's Eve 09 22:19, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

so, should I withdraw this?--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Chocolate; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Chocolate;"> ☆Pebble☆ X3 02:00, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Tadpole (Ki) - for approval


Well, here it is. <span style="color: Black; font-family:Comic Sans MS; background:Blue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black;">Mossflight 21:49, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

So cute! Just darken the shading a little, and maybe make the nose a bit duller; right now it's bright pink. -- ♫ Ec ho mi st <font color="Teal">Talk/<font color="Indigo">Contribs 22:37, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink our left is good, but make the right one the same color.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:05, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Rubblepaw - for approval
Rubblepaw, my first apprentice and my fourth Code of the Clans character. Comments? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Teal">Talk/<font color="2A417D">Contribs 16:20, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice Echo! Just lighten the highlights on his shoulder a little bit. Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 21:59, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Thanks, Minnow =) . Lightened shoulder highlights. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Teal">Talk/<font color="2A417D">Contribs 22:12, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Your welcome, you deserve it. As for the picture, I don't see anything wrong now.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:40, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

troutclaw - for approval
*Sighs* I haven't grasped the consept of clasic tabbys yet. Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:38, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

This looks fabulous, Minnow! :D Only thing is that his eyes look like they're white... :-/ -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Teal">Talk/<font color="2A417D">Contribs 22:44, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby markings look too much like Jaypaw's-- ♥Sha dow edh eart♥  23:58, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Echomist: Silly me, the eyes are white. But it's 6:30am for me, so i'll do it after school. Shadowheart: That's because I did Jaypaw, so I used the same style, not the smae exact markings.-- Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 10:38, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Cora (R) - For approval
Here she is? Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:Orange; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Black;"> Ghostfire Happy Halloween! 01:57, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

This is very nice, Hawkfire! Although, you could thicken and darken the shading; I can barely see it. Also, the ear pink is much too bright for a black cat and could be blurred some more. It looks great, otherwise! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple; ">Hawktalon Talk 19:49, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Fernpelt (W) - For Approval
Not much to say other than that this is my first tabby. Constructments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple; ">Hawktalon Talk 19:54, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is beautiful, Hawktalon! The only thing that needs to be fixed is the ear pink - right now, it's filling the whole ear, but it should be a triangular shape kept inside of the ear. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Teal">Talk♦<font color="2A417D">Contribs 20:00, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Foxleap (W) -for Approval
Comments? -- ♥Sha de♥ <font color="#d8bfd8">Meow/<font color="#008000">Prey 22:01, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! All I have to say is that there are some blurred sections on the tail. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Gray;">Hallow's Eve 09 22:39, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

REuploaded Fixed smears!!!-- ♥Sha de♥ <font color="#d8bfd8">Meow/<font color="#008000">Prey 00:44, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For approval


(M) - Not much to say about these. First blank I've made where you can see both sides of the face and such, and probably the last blank I'll do for a long time. Will make a colored version over the weekend. (Maybe.) Constructments? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:51, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Very cute. But their bellies and legs look.. weird. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;black; background:Orange; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Black;"> Ghostfire Happy Halloween! 23:44, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

A few things though...What i think could be improved  How I would do it..... Feel free to remove this or disregard it if i'm wrong, but its lineart looks a bit odd only in this area. Summary of it: The arm has odd, unnecicary lines, the showing hind leg goes a bit up, or thick, the stomach area is oddly shaped, and the eye is a bit odd... But its fabulous in the rest.-- ♥Sha de♥ <font color="#d8bfd8">Meow/<font color="#008000">Prey 00:21, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg looks a little disproportionate--AutumnSky 02:26, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Molepelt - Up for Approval again
Well, I'm sorry everybody. I was in hospital, I was sick, and discharged just yesterday. So, here is Molepelt again.–– Σ  ãliãs   G.  r.  paw RR.jpg 11:49, October 22, 2009 (UTC)