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Smokepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
prepare yourselves for a kit party! XD The shading isn't as bad as I thought it would be. --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:31, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. This is gorgeous though! The Fox Girl (talk) 02:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I really love everything about this picture! Could you lighten the face a smudge? NikiandCats (talk) 10:11, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:21, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can hardly se it. 09:27 Fri Nov 28

Define your light source please. Burntclaw (talk) 13:05, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:10, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is cute!

Reupload thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:25, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to give it some depth? 03:49, 11/30/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:10, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

He still looks flat. Try to blur it at a lower rate than you normally do. Also, define the shading on the legs. 04:24, 11/30/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:06, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Ok, instead of defining shading, we're gonna define the light. Define the light on the legs and tail. That should do the trick. 00:40, 12/2/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:39, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light in the tail? Burntclaw (talk) 10:02, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the forepaw closest to the back paw 15:37, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:08, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your tail shading a tad more. 14:28, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:35, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Snowbird (K) - For Approval
First character ever!! (I'm so proud of myself) Echorunner (talk) 12:50, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, I did it for you. This is amazing! :) maybe blur the shading more? There needs to be nose pink as well. This is very good for your first charart The Fox Girl (talk) 12:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

If you are a kit, it should say "For evaluation" instead of "For Approval"- Anyway, please define the shading on the tail and the legs, but great work! :) Burntclaw (talk) 12:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think you can define it everywhere. 13:00 Fri Nov 28

Plus, this should be called File:Snowbird.kit.png. I also fixed the thumbnail. 13:06 Fri Nov 28

Thanks! I'll remember next time!!!!

Remember to sign your posts with four "~"s, also, when ever you re-upload something, remember to notify us by writing something like Re-ups. XD Btw add shading to the legs plz. If you need help with the placement of the shading you can look at the apprentice tutorials. Also, the file is still not named correctly. Burntclaw (talk) 14:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

To rename it, just rename it in the next upload The Fox Girl (talk) 14:26, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, it makes less work for admins (maybe) if you wait and have an admin rename it for you. 14:54, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please, it's much easier to just let me rename it. Which I just have. I'm also gonna change the heading to "For Approval" since I think this is good for an apprentice-rank promotion tbh.

Along with defining the shading on the legs and tail, maybe add another layer of shading on top of the existing one at a lower opacity ro create some depth? 21:07, 11/28/2014

Blur the earpink a bit? The Fox Girl (talk) 07:12, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It looks plenty blurred enough to me. 21:36, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink, actually? 03:47, 11/30/2014

Sharpen the shading a bit, it looks flat. Burntclaw (talk) 00:15, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Just a friendly reminder: please remember to re-upload your image by Friday(Dec. 5th) or it may be declined. Since when you don't upload for seven days it is considered lack of work. (Yes I know this is a leads' job, but nobody had said anything so...please don't be mad at me). 19:26, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

She actually did, she just forgot to reup Burntclaw (talk) 02:45, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs, also define the shading on the tail. The Fox Girl (talk) 05:02, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Well I'm now just seeing changes so I don't believe she already did before I posted that message. Unless wikia is broken again. But if forgetting to say reup is the case, she could still get her image declined if we don't know what we're looking at. That's just the way the boat floats, and I'm just trying to warn her ahead of time before she has to experience that. Back to the image, define the facial shading and define the depth of the body shading. This is looking really good! 14:07, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lily (Ki) ~ For Approval
K so yeah. Siamese. meep. 11:12 Sat Nov 29

Smooth out the collar lineart, and bring the collar tag down. The collar tag is hanging from the collar, not behind it. 11:17, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the back a bit? Burntclaw (talk) 11:19, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, and the changes are here! 11:35 Sat Nov 29

Beautiful picture! Though the face could use a little smoothing out a bit. Just to fade into the tan colour of the cute cat ;3 Could you define the back just a smudge too? NikiandCats (talk) 14:15, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 15:54, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly tint the shading? It appears as though you've used black, but I think that a darker brown would suit the cream more. If not, that's fine by me. 19:38, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Try to make the collar a bit more, like, round, like on Millie's kit 01:21, 11/30/2014

Reups, 17:07 Mon Dec 1

It's still rather flat on the neck. Burntclaw (talk) 00:33, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

For the shading on the cream parts, I recommend tinting it a dark red. <span style="">00:37, 12/2/2014

Friendly reminder that shading tint is not required, so I believe if they were asked already and didn't tint the shading on the upload afterwards, I don't think you should ask them again unless they ask for shading tint suggestions. It's starting to become more commonplace and I'd like to really express that it is not mandatory and never will be. Using black is perfectly fine and both Lily and Rose do not have tinted shading on their kittypet images anyways. This doesn't mean go and nominate them to tint the shading. Plus, I think just thinning out the shading a bit would fix this just fine.

Define the tail shading and the collar shading. This is looking wonderful! 14:25, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Goosefeather (Ki) - For Approval
how do i even do fur ruffles Brick   The Bite of '87  11:37, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples, I can't tell they are there. Lovely job :) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:39, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and inbetween the legs. This is amazing, Brick~ =) 18:18, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, also defined the tail shading a bit. and incase changes aren't showing Brick   The Bite of '87  11:57, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading on the face. Niiiice B) <span style="">00:35, 12/2/2014

Re-ups Brick   The Bite of '87  23:24, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Brightflower (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried out Jayie's shading style which I love <3. I adore her cute lil' muzzle. The eyes are larger because in her description it states that she has "wide-set amber eyes" so I just wanted to add emphasis on that. Colour & design taken from the warrior & queen pixels. all the kittens    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:51, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Forgot the pale paws. ._.    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:59, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I fixed the alignment for you^^ Also, define the stripes a bit, as they're more pronounced on her other images. And define the shading & shading depth. This is pretty =) 13:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the eyes are normal on the other images, and you //need// to match that, so make them normal size please. And define the shading. 13:53, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you Frosty for fixing the alignment! I've defined the stripes, shrunk the eyes, shading & shading depth. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:05, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <span style="">03:45, 11/30/2014

can you blur and maybe thicken the shading everywhere not on the head? 03:49, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? I kinda can't see them. This is really cute, though.

Re-uploaded - Thank you! All change have been added, although having some trouble with the stripes. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is making her looks pretty green in those areas. Try tinting it a dark red? <span style="">00:34, 12/2/2014

The only place she "looks green" is probably the paws. Everywhere else looks fine to me, imho. Again, as I've said before, tinting shading is not mandatory, Ruefrost, so please do not think you're under any obligation to do so- you can do whatever you're comfortable with doing.

Lighten the shading, I can't see the pattern through it. It could also be expanded a bit, 'cause she's looking a tad bit flat. 15:30, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened the shading, defined the pattern, tweaked the muzzle slightly & define the shading (kinda..)   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:38, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? The shading still looks green on the paws. The Fox Girl (talk) 03:08, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. The Fox Girl (talk) 06:21, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 14:22, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the paws? It looks.. blotchy, for lack of a better word? If you think its fine, feel free to ignore me. :)-- 20:50, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Clawface (Ki) ~ For Approval
Kit storm! =) I feel like I'm the only one who really liked Clawface..now I'm not sure if he had any scars that were confirmed when he had been a kit. I can go through YS again later, but you all could make it easier on me if you just say he had one over here or there. Now 1 thing I must be clear on: I cannot define the earpink. I'm matching other images and that's the color they were when I picked, and that's the color they are now. Thank you. Comment away~ 14:04, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Why would he have scars as a kit?? He doesn't have them as an apprentice, how would a kit get scars? Anything big enough for that would probably be mentioned XD Define the shading a tad? 14:08, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. XD well I've seen kits in real life that have scars because of cuts on things left around, and other cruel humans things..it's a sad thing when you see kits with scars. So I assume anything can happen, too, in the series lol. Especially when your name is Clawface. :3 14:32, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Mm. It's pretty sad indeed. Define the shading some more on the tail and legs? 15:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:15, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

You're gonna have to do something with that ear pink, Darkfrost. I can't see it at all, and it looks like he doesn't have any. Try picking from the lighter spots, and I'd go so far as to say you can even use the ear pink color from the alt warrior. I honestly can't even tell he's got ear pink. These blanks are terribly small and sometimes you have to tweak colors to get them to show up.

Re-uploaded. Before, I had picked from the rogue. This time, I picked from the warrior, which seemed to have lighter earpink. Let me know if you can see it or not. I know, these blanks are so freaking small it's hard to make anything appear, like shading and earpink. *.* 18:47, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. It's ok if the earpink doesn't match completely in cases like this so we can //see// it, I would think. <span style="">00:48, 11/30/2014

Re-uploaded. Altered the color so you could see it. It's not too far off, only a shade or two. 13:04, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the face a bit? I know it's shaded, just don't know where the light falls. <span style="">00:32, 12/2/2014

Re-uploaded. Added a highlight on the face, too, to help clarify a bit. Also messed around with the facial shading. 13:45, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the main part of the body? It looks a bit... eh, I don't like saying blotchy anymore since it kinda seems rude unless it's obvious as hell, but... it just seems a bit rough? Perhaps that's a better word... I dunno.

Lol I see what you're talking about. Eh it's smudged shading so idk. I guess I could screw around with it a bit later. Maybe I'll even attempt David's amazing style. 12:58, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading. Much happier with it, it is also no longer rough/blotchy. 19:08, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
So beebs said the nonpregnant blanks can be considered approved. This counts as a redone queen, so I believe I'm allowed to keep this and Jake, am I not? flooof 00:03, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

reups i found what is either waste orrrr a smudge on my screen that looks like waste. 00:26, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading some more, and define the shading on the back leg farthest from us. I love this, and her tail XD 12:51, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Flooooooof 13:12, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading on her rump and tail?

but of course 21:04, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Perfect! There is nothing I would do to change this! Its brilliant <3 NikiandCats (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014

Plz sign ur posts with four "~"s, by the way, can you lighten up the shading just a teeeeeeeeennnyyy bit? Burntclaw (talk) 00:28, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, tbh. It looks brilliant like this. <span style="">00:30, 12/2/2014

Can you define the stripes on the main part of the body? Like the belly and upper back? I'm having some trouble seeing them. Also, are her stripes (especially the tail stripes) smudged on this? Because on her other images, they aren't, and the color seems fairly lighter when looking at this one.... it kinda reminds me of the color of her older images in the file history. I also think she has four tail rings, while on this, I can only see three, unless there's a stripe at the top that I can't see? I'm so sorry; it sounds like I'm nagging and talking bad on your image. ;.; It's really good and I like it and I want to make sure it matches because she deserves it for raising those kits.

Went ahead and redid it, since it wasn't co-operating. It was the right color, just the highlights throwing it off. And you didn't sound like you were nagging or anythin', you were simply giving what I like to call "Constructive criticism.". And you're right, she does deserve some justice. 00:00, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink? The Fox Girl (talk) 03:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Whiten the paw up, it almost looks like a creamy-color right now. I love this so much, you definitely did her some justice! 14:20, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reups The paw has shading on it, so of course its not pure white. I'm not lightening it, and you can easily tell it's white 19:01, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Did you shade the ear pink? If you did, I can't see it. If you didn't, ignore me.

Clovertail (Alt Q 2) ~ For Approval
i completely butchered this one im so sorry 00:55, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Just lighten up the chest shading a tick, it's a bit grey. And you did not butcher her you made her purrtty 01:32, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Shading's fine. There's enough white on her that you can tell the chest is actually white under the shading. <span style="">04:32, 11/30/2014

I agree with Sorrel, but not because I think it's gray. I think it's a bit too dark there.

The body shading seems to clash with the pelt color. Maybe lighten it a shade? 12:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 13:14, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back? <span style="">22:21 Mon Dec 1

re-up 00:04, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the facial shading just a tad..not too much though because it's far from the light and should be darker, but a little because like the body before, it is clashing a bit. She's beautiful Beebs~you've done a wonderful job. =) 13:51, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 23:41, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hind paw we can see all of? <span style="">23:50, 12/2/2014

re-up 19:46, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

re-up waste so 01:58, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the depth on the body & tail shading. 14:18, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-up i hope nobody complains about how the chest shading looks ~gray~, mind you there's like no light on it and yeah 02:41, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the chest shading a tad? It's looking pretty gray. If you think its fine, though, ignore me.-- 04:06, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

I just said that it looks fine - it's 'gray-looking' because there's added depth to it, so of course it'll be looking gray, y'know 04:09, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt Q 2) ~ For Approval
The shading is icky, so may I please have a redline? 20:50, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:20, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the facial shading and tail shading a bit? <span style="">22:05, 11/30/2014

Re-Uploaded 23:20, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changed shading into smudged shading. =) 23:39, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Upped 23:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Have the tail shading curve more with the shape of the tail. I like this a lot. =) 14:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the closest front and back legs, too, and add a few more flecks. Nicely done, Tiger, I don't think you need a redline for the shading ^_^  16:24, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I forgot to ask you to blur/smudge the belly shading a little. <span style="">21:33, 12/1/2014

Would you like the file to her queen, Tiger? 22:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks. ^-^ 00:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I think this may need a bit more flecks on the right side of the face? Either that or define them, because I can kind of see them, but Im not sure. <span style="">00:11, 12/2/2014

Lighten up the shading on the left front paw. Burntclaw (talk) 00:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:51, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Make the shading curve with the tail. <span style="">23:46, 12/2/2014

Re-upped 03:08, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Plz lighten up the shading on both front paws- they look like darker paws instead of shading. Burntclaw (talk) 11:38, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Please lighten up the shading a tad on the hind leg farthest from us, I honestly cannot see the stripes through it. 13:06, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading lot more, it looks hard edged. Especially on the tail. Burntclaw (talk) 10:04, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Add shading on the shoulder. There would be shadow there because of the head. <span style="">17:11, 12/5/2014

Re-uploaded Sorry for not re-uploading a lot, life got to me. 15:53, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

This is looking great! :) Lighten up the shading a liiiitttttllllleeeee bit on the head? Burntclaw (talk) 03:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define your light source? The back is telling me it's coming from the top, while the facial shading is telling me it's coming from the bottom right. Perhaps switch around the facial shading, or play with the body shading some? Idk, if this sounds confusing ignore me. ^^'-- 03:50, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Ashheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried Jayie's shading. All colors from the warrior image, which I'm the OA of. Comments? 21:57, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the chest? <span style="">22:22, 12/1/2014

Reuploaded. 22:33, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source and blur the shading a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the light source just fine, though I'll change it if others agree. As for the blurring, I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur or smudge her shading. 00:53, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading above the hind leg could be defined more <span style="">05:32, 12/2/2014

Reuploaded. Changes |here. I'll fix the waste next. 21:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on this <-- front paw. 03:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:35, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I honestly cannot tell where the light is coming from on this source. The head tells me it's coming from straight above, the chest tell me it's coming from the left, and the legs and side tell me it's coming from the right. 13:12, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to change the shading again unless it's either absolutely necessary or involves dulling the highlights. 13:33, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs and blur it everywhere else. 03:46, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just defined the shading, as I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur her shading. 16:06, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try and smooth out the shading somehow? I know it seems silly, but this looks a bit too abrupt, for lack of a better word? I'm sorry, I'm mobile and can't fully explain what I mean.

Cherrytail (Ki) - For Approval
02:22, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

SHe's cuuuuuute. Define the shading a bit on the legs?

Smudge the colors together more to match the other images. Burntclaw (talk) 04:52, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

She's adorable, Ducky! =) Define the tail shading some more. 14:00, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think the shading could be defined overall. <span style="">23:44, 12/2/2014

re-uploaded 15:45, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the image overall to match her other images, the color seems quite dark. Burntclaw (talk) 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Gorsestar (K) ~ For Approval
I couldn't get ahold of any of his files, but i tried :P. He probably doesn't match 110%,  but i colorpicked from his other images as best as i could. ^^'. As usual, smudged shading; so please don't ask me to blur it. His hair spikes are so adorable~  04:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the leg to our left and the tail. Also maybe add some shading in the esr to our left the face looks flat over there. Nicely done, Breeze. <span style="">05:34, 12/2/2014

Define your earpink a bit, too. Welcome to hell: where you must try to define an earpink that blends in perfectly with its pelt colors! XD I likey this =) 13:58, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. finally.-- 14:41, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, again. Forgot his pale markings.-- 04:05, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sunstar (Ki) - For Approval
tiny child sunstar <span style="">23:39, 12/2/2014

He's adorable! Define the shading on the neck? I can't see it. Burntclaw (talk) 00:20, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

reup boop <span style="">00:39, 12/3/2014

Define the the shading on the front <- leg. I like this a lot. 20:51, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

reup I like it a lot too lmao <span style="">21:14, 12/3/2014

Define the ear pink. Burntclaw (talk) 13:08, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

One Eye (Ki) ~ For Approval
ok 03:48, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

I'd say define the shading on the face? the ruffles make it hard to see >< 03:59, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 04:09, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. I can hardly see it. Burntclaw (talk) 09:59, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 11:19, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale part into the rest of the fur more on this > front paw. And I don't know if I am seeing things, but it looks like there's a little waste on the top of his head and a little more over on his right > side down by his visible back paw. This is amazing~nice job. 15:24, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded. its already smudged to the max on that side o-O but i got rid of the waste. 23:03, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Oh lol. Would he have some fur spikes on top of his head? You can't really tell with the rogue so I dunno. 14:14, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

A couple of spikes wouldnt hurt. Since you can barely tell on the rogue, it'll be up to David if he wants to or not. Could you perhaps define the shading on his chest? (if there is any, of course.) 03:54, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Dove's Wing (Ki) ~ For Approval
I somehow managed to upload the wrong version twice, I am a failure <span style="">04:45, 12/3/2014

Lighten up the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 06:49, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I think in this case, it would only need to be lightened a small amount. It looks good on the legs and tail, but I think the main body shading could be lightened a bit.

Re-uploaded <span style="">01:31, 12/4/2014

Smudge the shading a bit more? It looks a bit hard edged. Burntclaw (talk) 09:58, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Brightspirit (kit) ~ For Approval
Poor Emmy :( :'( Stupid tornado. Burntclaw (talk) 08:19, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are supposed to break apart, so to say, and form a bit of a triangle-like shape around her chest area. There should be the accidental triangle shape, two more lines, and then another connected stripe at the bottom. I know it's a lot for a kit image, but I hadn't known about her qualifying for it when I made this style. The stripes are smudged kinda like a lot of the users here smudge their shading too, if that helps. ^^ Also try and give the shading a bit more of a shape. I'm not sure if it's my computer, but it looks like a bit of block of shading on her chest. Could very well be my eyes, though. Damnit I wanted this I adore her. ;.;

Re-ups El tornado es muy estupido :<<<<<<<< Anyway, re-did the stripes. Burntclaw (talk) 08:56, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit and connect those top two neck-area stripes so the top three form a triangleish-like shape. I swear that was not intentional when I made the StarClan image- it just happened. lmao yes the tornado was quite stupid. I dunno what it was doing on the ground anyways- they need to stay away.

Re-ups Brainless tornadoes Whew, this is hard :'D Burntclaw (talk) 09:11, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups lightened the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 09:05, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen up the chest stripes a bit, as they're less blurred and more uniform on her other images. But keep them a little blurred only at the tips. This is beautiful~ 15:19, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

They shouldn't be blurred at all. The stripes on her StarClan image are smudged.

I did smudge them -_- but Ill re upload soon, I'm kinda busy atm. Burntclaw (talk) 02:38, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Oh goodness, Burntclaw, I'm sorry. My comment was directed towards Darkfrost, not you. She said to blur the stripes at the tips, but they're not blurred at all on her other image. Sorry for the confusion and keep up the good work- she's very adorable. *.*

Thanks! :D Burntclaw (talk) 02:44, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Whoops I'm sorry, I'm meant to say smudged** I'm not sure why I said blurred lol. I must of been thinking of something on another image while commenting on this. My bad. *.* 03:04, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Re-did the stripes!!!!!!!!!!! Comments? :p I personally like how it turned out. Burntclaw (talk) 03:44, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a bit. I like how it turned out too. 8D

Do you mind adding one more stripe near the tip of the tail? You don't have to, though. This is really great Burntclaw <3 20:48, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Ahhhh thx guys I'll reupload a few hours later right atm I don't have access to a laptop XD Burntclaw (talk) 03:28, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Windflight (ki) ~ For Approval
all colors from starclanner. i tried man 21:19, December 5, 2014 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Lighten up the shading on the side? Not sure if it's just my screen, but I seems very dark. Burntclaw (talk) 02:37, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Just like Burntclaw said. Its amazing. I agree with him. The right side needs a lot more brightening up. NikiandCats (talk) 02:45, December 6 2014

Er... Niki I'm a girl. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 02:47, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

There's shading on the side; of course it'll look dark, so I think it's fine =p 03:06, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading is a bit too dark on the side, I'm sorry. :/ Plz don't get mad at me. Burntclaw (talk) 03:09, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

it's not even that dark, it's fine the stripes are easily visisble. 03:10, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

It could be lightened a bit, but mainly on the face.

re-up there u go 03:19, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? This is gorgeous, Beebs. <3 13:49, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 14:35, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to his other ear? It looks flat over there. Great as always, Beebs. =) 03:56, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

I've used this light source without complaint many times before, and there's no shading to that ear because it's in complete light. This can also be seen on stuff like Frostfur's kit, too. 04:11, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Alt Q) - For Approval
I tried to copy the placement on the queen. If Ivy would like this, they are more than welcome to come forward and I'll surrender it. ^^

Can you lighten the tabby stripes? Also, define the shading. --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:56, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Soften the texture some to match the other images more? <span style="">2:33 Sat Dec 6

Re-uploaded.

Define the stripes on the front legs. <span style="">3:40 Sun Dec 7

Reena (Ro) (K) ~ For Approval
You wouldn't believe how fast I finished this. I know the shading is icky. Thanks Burntclaw for the help on this image. :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:58, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Damnit the shading was leaking The Fox Girl (talk) 03:00, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaastteee I used my sister's account again... -_- The Fox Girl (talk) 03:54, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receeding from the lineart. Also, while your at it define the shading on the tabby parts, please. Well done, Fox =) 03:57, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Longtail (Ki) ~ For Approval
<span style="">18:41 Sat Dec 6

Y'know, given that he's a pale silver tabby, wouldn't you think his images should be a fair bit lighter? I was just thinking about that the other day, and since you have the kit image up, wouldn't now be a good time to mention that? We've tweaked images that are around the same darkness that are cited silver tabbies, and given that he's also said to have black stripes, I'm pretty sure that Longtail would fall under the silver tabby rule. He looks more of a neutral gray right now.

Sure, I could lighten it up now. I'll nominate the images now as well. <span style="">19:54 Sat Dec 6

Re-uploaded. <span style="">19:56 Sat Dec 6

Graystripe (Ki) ~ For Approval
comments? 18:40, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Add some stripe to the tail? And did you fill in the nose? <span style="">18:43 Sat Dec 6

Reups oopsie 19:05, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.

Reups 23:22, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Jay's Wing (Ki) ~ For Approval
Can't make Stormcloud co-operate, so have this in the meantime 18:55, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some. They're more blurred than this on his Sharplaw and Softpaw images. <span style="">19:11 Sat Dec 6

reups 19:48, December 6, 2014 (UTC)