Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 179

Mossyfoot (Star) - Approved
She's back you guys. (Snowdapple said I could post this after it was archived so here ya go)

Near the tail diagonal almost from the very back patch, the shading's a little blotchy. 00:21, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading

smooth the shading.

re-up Why won't you smooth out????

There's a little bit of leaking shading where the body meets the tail. 01:22, May 31, 2017 (UTC)

you think you could remove some of the white dots in the pupil? it makes it hard to see

re-up There's no leaking shading, it's probably just the texture.

No, look at the area I circled in red. The patch of shading I was trying to point out to you doesn't touch the lineart at all and also looks kind of hard edged. If it's texture, you should probably smooth it out there or whatnot because the shading really does appear to be leaking. 20:01, June 1, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Eh, not too happy.

its not like ivy's suggestion damaged ur image lol. just had to point that out. Life actually sucks 24/7  so   lol 06:50, June 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the brown patch on the > front leg could be a little bigger, as it seems to cover more length on the apprentice

re-up Redid the texture because I didn't like it.

Beautiful! Maybe define the texture just a tiny bit? Good job! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 01:57, June 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you add a tiny bit of shading on <- ear?

Prehaps define the tail shading better 21:26, 6/06/2017

re-up Thanks Cosmo!

Define the facial shading better. 01:53, 6/09/2017

Define the shading depth. 01:57, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

re-up may lighten shading

Define the earpink 12:45, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out and/or lighten the shading a little? 12:51, June 9, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Let me know if it needs smoothing.

The shading depth could at least be smoothed out a little. Great job! This is really pretty. 01:12, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Thanks Shy!

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the face and tail. Looks nice!

re-up thanks! ^^

Define the texture on the brown patch on the shoulder a smidge. 21:15, 6/15/2017

Can you define which one? I see two that could possibly be the one you're talking about. Is it on the left or right?

I'm pretty sure it was the only visible shoulder patch, as the other one on --> side is more on the arm. http://vvcap.com/8Bm0RHbyN4u 01:14, 6/16/2017

re-up Technically I would count that as a back patch, but I guess it's also in the shoulder area.

CBA?

Approved

Violet Dawn (W) - Approved
Okay cool

It might just be me, but I can't see the art... -- 18:35, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

How bout now?

I can see the image. Add some shading to the front paw furthest from us. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 18:50, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yup, see it now. Maybe define shading depth on the back and possibly the tail? -- 18:55, June 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

reups Really hated the shading. Redid it.

Smooth out the shading a little on by the front of her leg? 12:45, June 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups The little triangle of shading on the shoulder?? I think that's what you meant

Smooth out the texture a bit, especially on the face and by the ears. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 02:30, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I smoothed the face texture because I agree that it was rough but the rest of the texture is the same way I have it on her queen image so?? Her images have generally defined texture

Add a but of shape to the neck shading - maybe curve it some to shape the head, b/c it seems a little straight across atm

reups This look better?

Looks great^^ CBA?

Just a question and not meant to break the CBA, but... is the patch of darker color on the lower tufts of fur on the chest of the cat meant to be shading? My desktop is a butt with colors and I can't tell.

Yeah, it's that one bit of shoulder shading that's on the apprentice guide.

Alright, thanks. I figured it was intentional, but I wanted to make sure instead of just trying to get you to change it without asking first. This'll be approved going by when Spooky CBA'd it unless someone else breaks it in the meantime @ the other leads.

Approved

Dew Nose (W) - Approved
I'm proud of this! Comments? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 18:53, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the stripes? This is super good! I love the nose. :) 19:21, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes are the same color as the ES, so I don't know if I should..? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #beaubeau 19:23, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

i don't think the color is the problem, it's the fact that they are over smudged. Perhaps unsmudge it a bit? (also this is cute :3)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Does this look better? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:15, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Seems too dark, and the pattern fades into the shading on the back. <span style="">04:45, 6/15/2017

Re-uploaded. It's the same colors, and there must be a lot of shading on the back, I suppose. Plus there's a black patch on the back. It must also be because of the color of shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:55, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups again. I tried making the stripes more visible under the shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:59, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be more visible under the neck/back shading. 22:11, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does this look better? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:38, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading everywhere except the tail?

Re-uploaded. I darkened the shading some, so hopefully it's more visible, but I hope the stripes don't fade into it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:35, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups again. Messed with shading opacity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:42, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Messed with shading opacity again. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:50, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? Job well done. =O

Approved

Bristlekit (Star) - Approved
Just to let an admin know, there are a bunch of unneeded and incorrect files for Bristlekit, if you just search up "File:Bristlekit" and see some. 23:02, June 14, 2017 (UTC)

Can you colorpick from a lighter spot on the kit image? I can't really see the shading all that well.

Reuploaded Yeah, I agree it was a bit dark. 01:00, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

^^This is better. Define the light on the tail and smooth the shading some?

Reuploaded 01:23, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Is it my bad eyesight, because I see some texture on the kit. <span style="">03:00, 6/15/2017

I can't see it? Is there some? 03:28, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell myself, but maybe? http://vvcap.com/3M1TDzQVnSE <span style="">04:04, 6/15/2017

I can't tell either. Is Spooky around to confirm or deny this? :) 04:18, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Spooky isn't the OA, Winter. Please make sure to check the file history completely first. Raven is the OA (Diablo is their current username), and they do pop up from time to time. While it might seem like there's texture, I do know that Diablo has a very intricate shading style, and it's possible that might be what we're seeing. I think we can leave it as it is for now, and if it turns out that it is texture, then we have the tweak page for a reason.

Sorry, I'll check next time. And that's fine, I cna always tweak it later. 21:55, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

I asked diablo when I tried this image, and they said they didn't know whether or not it had texture as they did it a while ago Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:23, June 16, 2017 (UTC)chat

Okay, I'll just leave it. Thanks for the information. 13:59, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little bit, and define the light on the tail. 22:13, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reup 00:13, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved

Firestar (Alt. A) - Approved
Shown as solid in the manga of BP; he has other alts for this, including one from the same manga. In case your wondering, no, this doesn't have texture, neither do his other alts for this; it's just the shading that makes it seem like it does. Comments? 04:32, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Prehaps soften the head stripes, they seem too sharp compared to the alt kittypet, although I haven't compared them. <span style="">04:49, 6/15/2017

Add some lighting to the back legs? I like this, good job, Bluestar! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 05:12, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. I'm holding off on softening the head stripes, as, if anything, I'd say they are softer than on the kittypet and leader alts. 19:45, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

Reuploaded. 21:49, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define tail shading. 21:58, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:22, June 15, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart at the base of the chest

Reuploaded. 01:53, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

you probably dont need it, but i have the file for the leader alt if you want. Life actually sucks 24/7  so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 06:15, June 17, 2017 (UTC)

The earpink looks a tad dark compared to the other images (namely the KP), from their lightest spots.

Isn't the alt kittypet and alt leader part of a set? Because the leader appears to have texture <span style="">03:14, 6/18/2017

As Bluestar said when she posted it, it's a shading style, not texture.

Define the shading depth

As the OA of the leader, I'd like to confirm what Jayce and Bluestar have said. Yeah, it's supposed to be a unique shading style that turned out to look pretty bad, but I honestly wouldn't mind tweaking it if it looks too much like texture since i do have the file XD 09:15, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I colorpicked from the alt. leader because I can just barely make it out on the kittypet (should probably be tweaked for that). 14:30, June 18, 2017 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA?

Approved

Littlestep (A) - Approved
this pattern is so freaking cute. kudos to jayce

Smooth the facial shading prehaps <span style="">10:57, 6/17/2017

Re-uploaded

....I like this and it matches wonderfully. CBA?

Approved