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Stonefur (A) ~ For Approval
Here he is! Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Take out the shredded ears. We typically assume that the injuries occur in the warrior rank unless the cat is mentioned with them as a kit or apprentice. 16:02, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Do I remove the scars as well or not? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I imagine when his ears got shredded those scars came along with it as well. Give him a gray nose unless he's like his sister and has a pink one 16:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

* shakes head* he has a pink nose. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:18, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:39, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the earpink and darken it a bit, smooth out the shading on the haunch, it's a bit blotchy, and make the highlight/lighter part of the tail go all to way down, not just at the tip. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay....sorry i was busy....I'll get to it in a second.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink. And it looks like he has a lighter muzzle. 12:19, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing, read what I said on Rosepetal.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? 13:18, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, alright I completely redid it. I have been wanting to do Stonefur's apprentice and now I can! 14:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I changed the heading if that's alright..... 01:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, define the light on the face and back, and darken the shading on your haunch 05:06, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I can't work on this today because I have this on a different computer. 14:26, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 13:59, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the sides of the pelt into the earpink. 22:05 Fri Jan 13

Also blur the earpink. 23:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink hun. 21:53, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading, it looks odd. o3o Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  22:07, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be reuploaded tomorrow or it'll be declined for a lack of work  03:21, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project may take over  02:50, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3  13:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Course. :)  Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:30, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:41, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color of the earpink be the same in both ears. 23:55, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

They are the same color. It looks different because of the shading. 00:05, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. 00:10, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

No. Don't. He was described with a pink nose. 00:13, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, all of Bluestar's kits have pink noses. ^^ Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. Sky-  Watchu want? 11:47, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Well then put shading on the other ear or something..because they don't look normal. One of them is neon, but the other is fine. 21:48, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:00, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit smaller and even out the shading; the head and shoulders looks darken than the haunch and tail xP 04:05, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:54, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink into the fur a little. -- 17:31, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:20, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Why are all his images different colors? XD Anyways, I think this is ready. CBA? :) 15:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to disturb the CBA, but in his description, it says "light." Shouldn't this and the other images be lightened, as it's in the description. 09:54, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lighten him up. I'll tell the html coloring for him so all his images will match. 13:04, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

This looks good to me. CBA? 23:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, Silver, but I don't see where your light source is. Your shading is kinda inconsistent. 02:16 Sun Jan 29


 * lol Remember to change the heading, Wildy xP 04:40, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. I want to work on a loner image. 11:51, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You're withdrawing this? Can I take over? 17:08, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

I took over, Re-uploaded =3 21:59, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more. 02:45, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

I think the shading could be blurred more Sky Dovahkiin  03:24, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink, it's very neon. -- Elo legs 13:51, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took the nose-pink from Silver's apprentice Stonefur, but I still darkened it. 22:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. 03:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, he's described as light and all his images will be tweaked for that. And lighten the shading and dull the earpink. 18:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I've been seeing things saying that only one image can be worked on per person. So I'll withdraw this. If I am allowed to work on more than one, though, (which I highly doubt) you can tell me and rub it in my face saying "I told you so!" =3 22:52, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. Anyone who wants to take over may 01:01, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So from what I understand, if it's an apprentice, you can still have it and a loner up at once, right? I'm not completely sure, as the way it was explained was very confusing to me, but if so, I'd love to take over. o3o 09:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over, please? 20:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Yes, just go reserve it first  20:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you. I'm going to reserve it now. Reuploaded. 21:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. Looks nice~! <3 22:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you. :3 22:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh... I said I was gonna take over.... *shrugs* Whatever. He needs to be much lighter. Don't bother matching his other images, the color's getting changed anyways. He's supposed to be light blue-gray. 03:54, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry Paley. ;C Made it more blue-ish. 05:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged earpink, dulled nose, and made pelt colour less purple. 5:41, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The color is like Bluestar's old image that was redone. Make it more gray with only a hint of blue, try coloring the shading slightly blue. 05:47, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. Any more comments~? (Made it slightly more gray and blue shading.) 06:21, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the base color less dark and smudged earpink. 06:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more and make the earpink less purple. 00:28, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. More pinky, less purpley. And I lightened it a little. C; 0:47, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 06:51, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add/define the depth in the eyes, and dull the nose a bit. 09:00, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dulled nose, defined depth, defined tail shading. 19:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by the base of his tail running along his back. 22:08, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I just realized that too. Thanks. Reuploaded. 00:10, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? This is very pretty. 02:25, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I apologize but the shading looks a touch too dark and it needs blurred, and the pelt needs to be smudged into the earpink. 02:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

That's fine. Reuploaded. Better? 03:17, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Isn't this too light for Stonefur? Or is this his alternate one? Either way define the light source.16:34, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made him darker and defined the light source. I don't know, everybody said not to match the warrior. ^^; 00:19, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur's current images need to be lightened, as his description says he is light. ^^ Sky To Kill An Empire  01:05, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe go with Mistystar's color perhaps? :3 Define the shoulder shading too. 05:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Honestly, Mistystar seems too dark to me. I defined the shoulder shading. 07:16, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (A) ~ For Approval
Splashpelt reserved it, but didn't put it up, and its past 2 weeks...so here it is. Comments? 00:28, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. 00:31, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. 00:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the shading on the haunch. Edit conflicts x.x 00:34, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Look at the innocent face on that evil'un. o3o If there is shading there, define it on the back paw furtherest away. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, there's no shading on that paw. I blurred the shading. Re-Uploaded. 00:52, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should give him a couple scars on his face. I know we normally assume that scars are obtained while a cat is a warrior, but considering his name... Well, yeah. Might just be me. 00:56, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Well, there isn't any proof, so I won't. Sorry, but it would probably just get removed, like Tornear's torn ear, because it was based on assumption based on the name. 01:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, for all we know, he could've gotten the warrior name Clawfoot. Can you blur the back shading a little? 03:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, there's a cite for his scars in his description. Tornear's ear was removed because there was no cite. 03:43, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

As an appentice though? It just said he was mentioned as being so-and-so's apprentice (I just skimmed quickly) 04:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. o3o Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 21:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not adding scars...sorry, but there isn't any proof. Like Ivy said, he wasn't mentioned having scars as an apprentice. Re-Uploaded. 23:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. 02:09, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink more 00:49, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I would make it a bit lighter to match his warrior charart... to me it kind of seems dark. 22:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The color is the same, but I was told to define shading, so I had to darken it a little. I got the colors from the warrior charart, though, so its fine. Re-Uploaded. 22:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. If you want to make it look lighter anyways and you have photoshop, you can do that by choosing a slightly light foreground color and using overlay with the paint bucket. 23:12, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the color is fine as it is. 23:40, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading a bit.  Pale  Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  00:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:50, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm leaving. Someone can take over. 23:58, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 23:59, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I have 3 projects already. 16:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over.17:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made him lighter because of his rouge image...but I'll change it back if anybody dislikes the colour. 18:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please change it back, the color doesn't really match either of his images now. It was fine before. And darken the shading a bit. 22:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:50, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. <span style="">02:35, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Mak ethe earpink less neon please. <span style="">19:08 Mon Jan 30

Re-Uploaded O.o I think I made it worse. Oh well..I'll just play with it for a bit see what happens xD..I personally think the earpink is fine but if anybody else wants me too I'll change it. 00:29, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading. ;D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  08:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 17:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit. <span style="">01:38, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-Uploaded 00:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw away from us. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  01:48, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading a tad. <span style="">04:50 Thu Feb 2

Re-Uploaded 01:46, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and blur the shading a bit more 06:05, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mak ethe earpink less neon. Purty! <span style="">18:35 Sun Feb 5

Re-Uploaded.. Changes not showing for the first time :/ 21:49, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. Other then that, I can find nothing wrong with this atm. 02:21, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

The overall shading seems somewhat blotchy. Smooth it out and blend it into the pelt. Feel free to disagree. <span style="">05:55, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Re-Uploaded I don't know if I made it better or worse. Changes will show soon..I hope. 16:31, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind-leg and tail, and smudge the ear pink <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 02:14, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Any more comments? ^^ 01:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. Ki) ~For approval
Hi! Like my charart? I made it pretty quickly =)

On the "characters needing art" page it said they needed a bracken alt, which might mean the alternate kit version, but I'm not sure so I'll post this anyways. 18:08, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

This isn't bracken colored. In fact, it looks exactly like his current kit image... 18:13, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I know it looks like his current kit image, but I made it on photoshop (I didn't copy it). I wasn't sure what the "bracken" meant. I'll make it lighter momentarily. 20:41, January 20,2012 (UTC)

It's a...thumbnail, I think? Change it pleeeease. 23:38, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I know I am not a part of the project, but if you don't know what "bracken colored" means, then you shouldn't do that charart.

Dethumbed. Rename the file Oakheart.kit.alt.png. Bracken colored is along the lines of this: If you use photoshop, use the eye-dropped tool to pick a color and use that as your base color. 00:21, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on his face and tail. You might want to fix it. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  13:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Light source looks a little bit, confused ,18:37,January 21,2012 (UTC)

I know what bracken looks like! I just wasn't sure what they meant by bracken on the characters needing art page. I'm going to use the colours from the alternate warrior version so that it looks the same. I'll also fix the lines around the muzzle and tail ASAP. 22:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

...Any more comments? -- 20:02, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

You should save it as a .png, not a .jpg, so the background will be transparent and there won't be waste pixels around the image. 02:10, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

It has to be png for more reasons than just that, so yes, change that. And rename this Oakheart.kit.alt.png. Also, be a bit more patient. Don't ask for comments unless you've been waiting a day or two and nobody's CBA'd or commented on it. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale  Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  23:58, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry; I'm just kind of an impatient person. Re-uploaded 00:52, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Minorly fixed heading, it still looks really pixely. 04:22, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, that's cause it was saved as a jpg at first. I'm sorry, but there's not much way to fix that without redoing, so I think that's what you'll have to do. Sorry. 16:14, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Oh...great. That's ok though I guess, since I can do solids really quickly. I'll re-upload it ASAP 21:02, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:07, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Look here for shading placement. Right now I can't tell where your light source is. <span style="">02:36 Fri Jan 27

Are you still working on this? 03:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but two weeks isn't over yet. -- 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean exactly? You've got one week before a chararts declined, it's been 6 days. Just cause you have that long till you can reupload doesn't mean you should take the whole time. If you're still working on this, reupload it then. This will be declined if it's not uploaded by tomorrow. 18:00, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 00:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Have you looked at the shading placement? It still is lacking. <span style="">04:52 Thu Feb 2

Sorry, just forgot the shading on the legs. Re-uploaded -- 23:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I can't tell where your light source is still. It looks like a highlight on the chest. Define your lightsource please. <span style="">01:10 Sat Feb 4

The light source is kinda coming from the front. If you look at all the other kit images, (especially Bluestar's) they look pretty much the same. -- 02:03, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Round/darken the shading; it's a bit flat and define the light on the face. 06:04, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, re-uploaded. There wasn't much I could do about the shading; I think it's fine. -- 16:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the face and the shading still isn't right. It looks really flat and the light source doesn't make much sense. Look at the apprentice tutorials? 20:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

The light source is fine, I think. Look at Bluestar's kit image. It's the same. -- 22:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Not really.... 03:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

If you want to copy the Bluestar kit image's light source, you'll need to have shading on the neck, forehead, edges of the face, legs/paws, back/waist, and near the base of the tail. If you want to, add a big highlight on the midriff/chest, on the face, and on the tail tip. Look here for some shading placement. do you use the dodge tool for highlights/burn tool for the shading? If yes, I suggest you make a new layer for highlights/shading and draw on your light source with a black/white pencil. Then guassion blur it. I can help you if you like. <span style="">05:57, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Still workin' on this? 20:51, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, still working on this. (And no, I don't use the dodge tool for highlights, I use the gradient tool. I don't think I need help, DJ CandyBud, but thanks for asking) Re-Uploaded -- 21:30, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Much better, this looks nice. Slightly blur the earpink, specifically on the cat's left ear. <span style="">05:59, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Aww he's so adorable!! Just make the earpink a bit more pink than orange. ^^ 01:42, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, Re-uploaded -- 18:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again; forgot the to make the earpink pinker -- 19:23, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more and I'll CBA. :) 04:09, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (A) ~ For Approval
Fallow's reservation ran out, so I snatched this up. According to the category page, this is the last apprentice image needing to be redone (but there could be more without categories). Woo! Comments? 15:36, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps make the stripes fade out a bit more like the elder and I believe the nose should be grey. Brilliant job like always, Shellheart. 00:17, January 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * I did this to match his warrior image, as the elder image is on the redo list. 00:51, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The elder image shouldn't be on the redo list, the warrior is getting tweaked by simply putting shorthair lineart over the old image, so the elder one doesn't need to be redone. I'm removing it now, so could you make this match the elder now? 05:00, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I was the one who was supposed to do that, I forgot to post it XD Problem solved. 05:06, January 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * Aww, dang it. The warrior image looked so much better than the elder image. (sigh) Fine, I'll do it. 15:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, someone else can take over. I just don't have it in me to copy that pattern when I like this one so much. 20:24, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can i steal this back? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 20:28, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 20:46, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You workin' on this Pouncey? 20:40, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yah, but I'm having computer issues. It'll be posted by Saturday. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I changed to title since you re-uploaded. Blur the shading on the haunch. 17:26, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

My computer still shows Shelly's version o_o Reuploaded... <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 19:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

There it is! Lighten the earpink so it matches the elder. 20:14, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fallow needed me to reupload for her, since she couldn't edit. 02:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a touch more 06:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more. <span style="">08:33, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

Reuploaded <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, and I think it might be ready. Lovely Fallow! 22:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the legs darker and the stripes slightly longer. Make the stripes fade out more at the ends and sharpen the stripe by the eye. <span style="">23:50 Mon Feb 6

Lighten the base color a little. This is gorgeous Fallow ^^ 06:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Fallow? 06:07, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lost the layers so i redid it. All the colors are fron the elder image. Comments? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 00:26, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes fade out more like the other images. 22:06, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (KP) ~ For Approval
She ate from the twoleg an' everyone else got one... Comments? <span style="">02:19 Sat Jan 28

Can you make that curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. 02:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back a little. 02:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading too, nice job! 06:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose color. 08:07, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">18:38 Sat Jan 28

The lineart for the neck looks a little bit too fat/blotchy. Try copying it from Nettlesplashs or Honeypaws. 19:53, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing, I don't feel like fiddling around with lineart. It never works out. Anyone who wants it, take it :P. <span style="">23:30 Sat Jan 28

I'll take it. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:19, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <span style="">02:27, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Darken the shadings please 17:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart out on the ---> side of her neck. 20:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg. 14:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg and the back a bit more. -- 02:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the shading to my liking. 12:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. 14:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <span style="">00:05 Thu Feb 2

Tone down the "highlights". 20:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I always use highlights. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:25, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Dont really see anything wrong. So, CBA-time! 02:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but can you blur the shading some more? -- 18:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  00:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

...continuing CBA? - 00:43, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but, blur the shading, even if you have to use the blur tool :3 <span style="">01:21 Sat Feb 4

Purple already said the shading is already blurred to the max. Another lead agreed with me on the chat that this looked okay. CBA agaain? 02:15, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Hate to interrupt, but can you darken it a bit to match the warrior image? 06:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

If I darken it more, it will look like black. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  12:44, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading just a tad bit more? And can you colorpick off the warrior image for the earpink? 16:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, with earpink straight from the warrior. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:58, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten/define the ear-pink a bit more? The color from the warrior might've been blurred over so much that the main color had been smudged into the black. Feel free to change the shade a bit. 06:02, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit more? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:57, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Whoa....this is great, but, in my view....Plumwillow was never even seen at the Twoleg nest. We don't really have any evidence that she was, and even though she may have gone with the other cats, it doesn't mean that she actually took any food. 18:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Quail, look at the article: "Afterwards, Plumwillow is seen with Birdpaw, Honeypaw, Sandypaw, and Nettlesplash getting food from the elderly Twoleg woman". Anyway, add the curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. This is lovely, DJ. 22:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Are you sure, I don't want to argue, but I own the manga, and she isn't ever at the Twoleg nest. However, if you really don't agree Purplemoon can continue. 22:36, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 06:09, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  20:52, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (Lo) - For Approval
Here she is. My first Charart in a long time. Comments? 17:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Whole image lineart is blurred, redone it please ,17:43,January 30,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to do it without redoing the image totally. 17:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little? And on chat last night, we agreed Brook should be either tweaked or redone becase she needs more stripes on her body. On her back leh leg and face especially. Would you be fine with doing that? :) Great work by the way 18:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart's blurred too. 19:23, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The ear-pink is in the wrong side of the ear where we can see it (edit conflicts! How dare it!) 19:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, that was me with the conflicts. Changes not showing. I think the earpink should be forward. Just looks more natural to me. 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and thicken the lineart one pixel at the torn ear. 04:03, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Please say what parts need to be blurred. That would really help. 15:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Try matching the stripes with the warrior version, as in, less smudging, and thicker stripes. Also make the shading more noticable while not overdoing it. So far, nice work! 00:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Atelda, I told her she could change the stripes because on chat we agreed Brook needed more stripes. 02:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you have the smudging go in the direction of her fur a little more and darken the shading? 03:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I love swirled tabbies, which is why I chose this design. Changes not showing. 15:36, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

The fur smudging still isn't going in the direction of the fur. And this actually has less stripes than the other images, so add more. They also look kinda unnatural, like they're paintbrush strokes, not stripes. And try looking at a reference of a swirled tabby to make it more realistic. And if her stripes are gonna be redone anyways, there's no need to keep the color of the other images, so can you make the base coat less ginger? 17:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:30, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner, smudge them, and change the color of the main pelt color and stripes to brown. Right now it looks red. 00:56, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. It's weird. It shows a previous one. Hmmm. 16:05, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it a lot? It's too dark right now. And the stripe pattern still doesn't look very realistic, it looks like brush strikes instead of stripes. 16:23, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

The very first tabby style you uploaded was good. You might want to go back to that style. But instead of rounded point ends, make them narrow out into points a bit (if that makes sense) 03:04, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, her prey-hunter was redone. You'll have to change to stripes. 15:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? 08:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, please. 22:26, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week since this was last uploaded. Declining this and any user without a current project may take over if they wish. 02:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh, I'll take over~ I've always wanted to do one of Brook's images. XD 03:44, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner image and first image for approval made on GIMP. I love GIMP now though. Any way, here he is! Comments? 19:19, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and tone down the highlights. Excellent! 19:21, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I swear, one more edit conflict and i shall lose it. Any way, i gave him the wrong eye color (don't ask how) So I fixed that also. Comments? 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. This is lovely daddy! <span style="">19:41 Mon Jan 30

Re-uploaded.   I have been discovered! Oh noes! Pshaw, comments? 19:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar some more and make it the same colour as the earpink. 20:50, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nyeh, scar. Your lucky i have the .xcf file Comments? 21:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Pshaw, shading is annoying right now. Any way, comments? 22:33, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more... 18:27, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar stand out. I also don't think it should be so shoop da whoopy. Make it straighter :3 19:16, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. 00:27, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Not half bad, Rain. This is looking excellent. 19:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Cloudy. 18:48, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar thicker and brighter. 18:50, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing, and when they do, i just gotta say ew. 19:09, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the scar a bit more. It looks a bit paintbrushy 06:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ew still. 19:23, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and define the haunch and shoulder highlights 04:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, make the scar a bit thinner and smudge it less. Otherwise great job ^^ 21:12, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It wasn't smudged but alright. Any way, thanks ^.^ 19:29, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur highlights.

Re-uploaded. 19:37, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar a little more <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 03:01, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner image! I'm in love with this <333 &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 19:34, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are spotz not colored in and can you blur the ear-pink more and add depth to the eyes and define the shading more? 19:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this File:Mist (Lo).loner.png, please. =) It looks good~ 20:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink. I think Mist was my second ever charart! *good times* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 21:30, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are a couple stray white pixles on the belly, the tail, the elbow and the hind leg 00:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

As this is a kit doing this image, I changed the heading. <span style="">03:04, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Well done Oakbreeze! This seems 85% complete to me...I will add you in as an apprentice now, and since I've evaluated this, this is now Up For Approval. 03:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Oakbreeze? 05:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I completely forgot about this! I'm so sorry! I'll work on it right now. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:00, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:06, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Hun this is beautiful!! Just blur/smudge the earpink a bit ^^ 01:00, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I kind of gave up on blurring so I tried smudging. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 14:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the whole thing. 06:47, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. Nice. <span style="">05:10, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Please work on this, Oakbreeze. 04:53, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Cinders (Lo) ~ For Approval
I love Cinders, comments? 21:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? Loverly. 21:58, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:01, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the transitions between the patches. 22:07, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:49, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the one on the belly so it's more consistent. 03:52, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you defne the earpink? I can barely see it. 16:45, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It might be your computer Bluestar. 21:25, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad? 01:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:53, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten the earpink a tad like the queen? 05:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I took the earpink from the queen. 12:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. 19:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:11, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the parts where the patches meet a wee bit more. Cinder's looking very purty! ^^ 21:15, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think I see a couple of unfilled pixels on the front foreleg, by the belly. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 07:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Those are filled in... x3. 19:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

•_• xD Then blur the shading going along the back. Better be shading... <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 22:58, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It is Sky, don't worry xD. 00:59, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and round it; it looks kinda flat, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more 04:59, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Speckletail (Lo) ~ For Approval
Certainly not one of my favorites. Comments? 06:31, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and make them more wavy. 16:10, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to while doing my best to match the old loner image. 03:13, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit lighter. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 03:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you match the elder image a bit? <span style="">06:25 Thu Feb 2

There's a bit of waste on the front leg <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:09, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Half her images are one color and half are another, so do you want the hex codes from the warrior so then that will be one less tweak later on? XD 20:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sure! 02:44, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I reuploaded to show you how I redid the stripes. If you think I should change the coloring than I will. =3 02:50, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think with the shading placement, the tail shading it should be moved up the tail more. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  10:10, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is so beautiful Ivy <3 Define the neck shading a little. 01:10, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hopefully I got what you mean, Sky. =3 02:23, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and then I think this'll be ready 05:01, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Egg (Lo) ~ For Approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlinks and blur them ,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺<font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="4" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~<font color="orange" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">L <font color="yellow" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="green" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less flat; It looks like there are only highlights. 02:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Start to do all thing please "Expand the hightlinks and blur them", right? ,16:58,February 6,2012 (UTC)

His hind leg doesn't look completely shaded, the one on <-- that side. :3 22:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafstorm, I did expand the highlights and blur them. I always do everything the people tell me to =3 And I just realized the shading needs to be blurred... <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺<font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="4" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~<font color="orange" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">L <font color="yellow" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="green" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 02:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think that shading is too heavy.

Cheshire, you should be specific. Where is the shading too heavy? Honestly, I think the highlights could be blurred a little more, and blended with the shading more. Right now, you can clearly tell where the shading/highlights meet. When I use them (rare, but I still use 'em now =P), I try and make them flow together. 17:43, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk* I made this such a fail >.< 14:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) ~ For Approval
The ear needed to be torn since he was a loner when he was decribed with it. Comments? 01:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripe a small bit? 01:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, as well. 04:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You're not allowed to have to chararts up at once anymore. You're gonna have to withdraw one of them. If you keep this one, darken the shading. 07:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Please pick one or I will choose one at random to decline. Right now, you're pretty much ensuring that you can do both of your images. Just a heads up, alright? 18:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I want this one withdrawing the other 01:12, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit. 17:24, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripe a bit more..01:31, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:04, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more, and maybe add a lighter part to the bottom of the stomach. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 22:53, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:51, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights and shading (and if you don't use highlights, then where the shading isn't) 05:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Woody (Lo) ~ For Approval
This is the correct title? It is from what I saw in the guidelines... First charart...;3; I know it's not that good...comments?? 03:37, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Very good. 90% complete, thus changing this to "For Approval", as I have evaluated, and Willowfern will now become an apprentice. 03:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

His description says he's shaggy. Can you add some lineart on the fur like Yellowfang's image? 03:47, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Of course. Also, thank you, Stoneclaw. :) Reuploaded 03:56, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some. Good first image! 05:39, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivyheart. :) Reuploaded 02:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eye, again, this is amazing @Willowfern! Possibly add shaggy parts to the legs and/or legs. 02:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Once again, thanks Stoneclaw. :) Reuploaded 02:20, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

To me, the highlights (or light sorce if you don't use highlights) almost look tinted green to me. When using brown, make sure it doesn't have too much yellow in it ^^ 19:11, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, this is really your first charart? Very nice! Well, I know Ivy already mentoined it, but i think he is whole a tad greenish, or its just my,dear PC? ,20:39,Febreary 2,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink go down a bit more and blur it. 17:29, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink placement is fine, just blur it. <span style="">18:28 Sun Feb 5

I completely forgot about this. :( I'll reupload as soon as I can. tonight or tomorrow   03:15, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

My first official one. Thanks, Leafstorm. :) Reuploaded 03:28, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a bit less brown red. This is really good for your first image. ^^ 03:40, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yay! First loner! Comments? ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:21, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful! ^^ Tone down the highligh, if there is one, on the haunch. 22:23, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I always use highlights, Mountain. ;) ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:28, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Arrrrggghhhh, I wanted to do this! Blur the shading just a touch. 00:13, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gotta be faster next time! ;) ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:01, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the collar ^^ 03:36, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:01, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Crop the pic around the lineart please. ,11:53,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Something happened, but I know I Reuploaded.... ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  12:24, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the lighter part in the middle brighter. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 07:34, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the collar lineart about one pixle thinner? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:40, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded That lighter part seems fine... ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  20:57, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. 01:48, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the collar sorta hang from his neck. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 23:03, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Q) ~ For Approval
Like a middle manager! >8D But really, convo for this is on the talk page. I edited the lineart to make her not-pregnant looking... so essentially, behold my image of Squirrelflight laying down! Comments? 00:27, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is..so purdy 8DDD Can you add some more stripes to the flank pretty please? 00:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

<333 Can you blur the flank stripes a tad also? 00:31, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! ^^ Can you blur all the stripes a bit actually? And as for the lineart, it seems a bit like her chest is sticking out a bit too much at the bottom. Like there's flab or something. Could you get rid of the little bit? :) 00:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I trimmed her down a bit more. Her back wouldn't be arching so much when she isn't pregnant or nursing. And I would add more stripes, but that'd deviate from her already established design. 02:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but can you move her pupil more to the centre? She looks like she's freaked out about something beside her xD Other than that, beautiful. 02:41, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'd actually rather leave them as is. I kinda wanted to make her look guilty, and I guess freaked out works as well. 03:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Well all righty then c: Tear her ear. 03:39, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out that lump in the middle of her back and raise her hindquarters. Breeze whisker  05:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you redline the hindquarters thing? I'm not sure what you mean. 05:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

That was badly phrased. Sorry. But I kinda meant to like make the hindquarters more rounded. I'd think with the lack of the belly, her weight would shift to lie less on her stomach and more on her haunches. Can you kinda see what I mean with this guy? I certainly don't envy you with this tweak. XD The anatomy changes a lot in a pregnant cat.. Breeze whisker  06:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Ahh, yup, I got it. Thanks. 06:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that?

The hind foot looks a little weird in that position. Move the hind foot a little over <--- side, even if it's only a little bit. 18:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the haunch lineart is kind of thick at the bottom. Thin it out to two pixils wide. Looking pretty good thar Ms. Shelly! 19:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Taper the tail up by the base. Maybe also make the hip a bit pointier towards the top; a bit too round with the more slender back. 02:22, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart at the bottom of the chin looks a bit thick. Thin it out by a pixel or two. 17:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did all that, and brought the tail in so it's a bit more consistent with the other queen images. 04:06, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The chin's still a bit thick and there's a kinda random bump on the haunch. Smooth that out a bit. 04:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I put the bump there in response to Scarlet's comment. 05:03, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 07:11, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:39, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the bump on the haunch a bit flatter? Don't remove it, but just make it less protruding. Make the chest curve in a bit more and add some shaggy hair to it. <span style="">23:58 Mon Feb 6

Re-Uploaded. I'm not re-adding the bit of shaggy fur going inder the front leg, since it's representational of a fat fold pregnant cats get. 23:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The neck seems a bit fat, could you thin it a bit? 16:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Ffff, I just curved it out because Wildheart asked me to. =_= Fine, I'll this it out... again... 20:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I trimmed out the neck and fluffed up the tail. Please don't ask me to trim out the chest as well. She does have a ribcage, you know. 17:45, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but the neck still curves out like this; (. It should curve in like this; ). And the chest should be trimmed out. She may have a chest, but in cats, it's much farther back and doesn't stick out like that. 03:06, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Sorry, but have you looked at a cat lately? Cats, especially wild ones, have a lot of loose skin even when they're thin. I'd rather leave her as is. I think she looks fine, especially considering the fact that the queens are always fed more than the rest of the Clan. 14:57, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Splash (lo) - CBA
Reposting 8D 06:23, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Pretty ^^. 13:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the haunch shading. 05:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Been awhile without comments, let's go CBA  04:48, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Pod (Lo) ~ For Approval
Woot! I snagged another one! Comments? 14:16, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. 14:21, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. =3 15:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the muzzle a little. 16:09, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes are showing now. 17:32, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:39, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bettah? 18:49, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Well done, blur the muzzle a tad more, and the ear-pink and define the shading a tad. 02:32, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing. 03:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 04:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some scars around his muzzle, since he was described with a scarred muzzle. 04:47, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good to me, but yeah you should add the scars -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  04:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

'''TIGERHEART! '''Dont mentoin the same things, please learn to read, yes? ,11:58,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. (optional I think ;3 )

Re-uploaded. I know I fixed the earpink! D= Added scars~ 23:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little. 03:15, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? :3 11:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the shading (make sure it's all the same darkness) 05:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...on another charart for approval, I heard from Moonleaf that shading doesn't necessarily have to be the same darkness. But I'll do my best. x3 14:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred the shading a bit, but I'm not making it the same darkness. 22:59, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Mothflight (Lo) - For Approval
Woohoo, my favourite, first MC, comments? ,14:31,February 4,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest/stomach area. 16:33, February 4, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded ,19:20,February 4,2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 07:06, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,18:54,February 6,2012 (UTC)

Lovely job Leaf. ^^ CBA? 00:25, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, disagreeing here. Could you make the shading all the same darkness? And make the neck all dark? And blur it a bit? <span style="">00:29 Tue Feb 7

Hmm, well, I've never agreed with the philosophy of "All shading should have the same darkness", since it isn't true due to the varying amount of light hitting the different areas, though you could darken the bottom of her neck, belly, and the feet closest to us, if your light source is above her. 22:09, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

sorry for long time..i have problems with gimp and this is blotchy, reuploaded ,16:38,February 10,2012 (UTC)

I see tons of shading waste by the back legs. 21:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,16:21,February 11,2012 (UTC)

I think Moonleaf's statement on the shading is right, and this is lovely, so, CBA? -- 18:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you lighten the highlights? And if there are none, could you blur or lighten the shading? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 23:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Socks (Lo) - For Approval
Ew, he's so ugly now that I made him D: Comments? <span style="">22:48 Sat Feb 4

Darken the base color. He looks gray. 22:52, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Was off his old loner image but ok. *Shrugs* <span style="">23:35 Sat Feb 4

It looks great :), nice job... I might blur the earpink just a little more Tiger  heart  ♥  23:42, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Reminds ne of my cat. 8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  02:21, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, next time, please do not just post compliments, post something constructive as well, unless there's been no other comments for 24 hours. Smudge the earpink a little bit more. 04:41, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ok Sweet, i know its only small thing but the white parts looks gray to me, can you lighten them a little please? 11:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think they're white, but if someone else agrees, I will change it. <span style="">18:24 Sun Feb 5

Let me give you a suggestion. Here's what I do. I shade the black part and the white on separate layers. That way I can play around with the opacity and everything, and so the black looks black, and the white looks...well...white.

Define the neck shading. 06:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:32 Wed Feb 8

Smudge the muzzle into the pelt. 21:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:49 Wed Feb 8

Can you blur the belly shading? 21:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. (IMO) <span style="">22:00 Wed Feb 8

Blur it a bit, Sweet. ^^ 02:19, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job~! ^^ Blur the ear pink a bit and smudge the back paw. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:07, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">01:57 Fri Feb 10

Blur the earpink a bit more. 21:31, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:49 Fri Feb 10

Define the "highlights" 05:05, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Ruby (Lo) - Under Evaluation
Alright, there she is... comments?

Tiger heart  ♥  01:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading, make sure the ear-pink fill the ear capacity, and erase the pink that's spilling from the lineart 01:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less hotpink, make it the same as her kit charart. <span style="">01:44 Sun Feb 5

Sure I'll reupload it in a second Tiger heart  ♥  01:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Tiger heart  ♥  01:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is still not 50% complete. Suggesting for deletion again. Get this to at least 50% completiong before uploading this again. 02:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, I suggest you look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement and blurring  02:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Thank you -- Tiger heart  ♥  02:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and I looked at the tutorials (thanks, Ivy) Tiger  heart  ♥  02:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading and fix the pixels on the paws, fill 'em in. 03:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay; Re-uploaded --☯ Tiger heart  ♥  03:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) It looks like some of the lineart on the legs and belly are blurred, possibly erase the extra pixels around it.
 * 2) Make the earpink the same colour and smudge it.
 * 3) Fill in the grey pixels on her feet and tail.
 * 4) Blur the shading LOTS . 05:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Er. Instead of the file archive, could you post the actual image? 05:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Redone -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't upload a new file each time you change it. Re-upload it over File:Ruby.loner.png. 05:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to blur the shading tons. Try using guassion blur under filters. There are also white pixels on the front paw closest to us. <span style="">08:26, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

You also still need to post the actual image, no the archive of it. And I don't think this is 80% complete, so you have a week to improve it before it's declined I believe. 08:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There are light pixels on the front paw, shadings are only applied not blurred, blurred lineart, some colours (ear-pink) are on the places where they can't be- this is all things they are wrong.. fix that 11:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sp... I can't upload the new one I did for a week? :( I fixed the pixels on the paw... hm... Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:26, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You can upload it. What Paleh means is, the charart/image doesn't look 80% complete. You have a week to make it look 80% complete. Constructivly, post the file, not the archive. 23:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:37, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So if I upload it again, will it get declined? If it's not perfect (by people's standards) Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  02:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind. Misunderstood it. Re-uploaded -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

... =_= Use the female lineart, not the male. 02:58, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons still. i can help you if you wish. Also smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">06:14, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Redone... still need to do something about the shading, I believe, but I fixed the pixels, used the female blank, and blended the earpink -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --❦ Woo  patch of green  273  04:14, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to be lightened up a lot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  08:48, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Redone once again, and lightened *wink wink* ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  22:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. If I could, I'd change the heading to "For Approval", because it looks way better than it did the first time. 00:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart I reserved this a week ago-- 00:46, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Acorn, you already have Birdpaw up, and you can have one up for approval at a time. 00:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blurring the earpink... Thanks Moon! Thanks! ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  01:45, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks some of her tail got cut off, but it might just be me. :3 18:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, Tigerheart, I mentioned if I could change the heading, and it doesn't mean you can change the heading. Only a senior warrior and above can do that if they feel the image is at least 80% complete. 20:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry... *embarrassed* I'm really sorry. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:13, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading on the body. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:12, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded... You can barely see the changes I made but they're there... lawl. Woo patch of green  ❦  03:14, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please stop thumbing your image. All you need to say is "re-uploaded" when you upload the file. xD 03:16, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

okay sorry. It won't happen again... is this 80% by any Senior Warrior's standards? I would like to do another and I have the day off from school today, so I have a lot of time to do a charart. How long do I have to wait until someone can approve this? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Has there been any comments besides mine in the past 12 hours? Woo patch of green  ❦  17:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ CBA
Ew. Comments? 02:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is bootyful Stoney <3 Can you give her a white muzzle and chest like her elder? 02:09, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya blur some of the mottles like the elder? <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 02:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It's awesome, but could look a bit more like an elder by blurring the mottles. Nice job, though, it looks so good

Tiger heart  ♥  02:40, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, please don't repeat comments if they've already been said. 05:56, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad <3  Elork   14:44, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more~ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There was waste. 20:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Could you match the image to the original loner image a bit better? Because this one doesn't match the elder quite as well. Mostly it's the missing patches and the white could be whiter and the base coat could be lighter. But I think it needs the patchy fur, too, if I'm not mistaken. <span style="">00:16 Tue Feb 7

Reuploaded. 06:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make some of the mottles darker and sharper. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  06:24, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Did you do anything I asked...? <span style="">06:49 Tue Feb 7

Yeah I did...? Oops! I forgot the patches! -- 16:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:20, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Can you define the pupil in the eye? 21:54, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 16:19, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading under her belly? Nice job Stoneh~<3 <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:34, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading 05:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- 17:16, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful image, Stone. CBA? 01:21, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sol's Father (Lo) - CBA
Woo, here he is again. Oh, and I'm also proud to say that his old image was the very last loner image to be approved with the old blank -confetti- Anyway, comments? :3 04:38, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

*checked the file history* The legs look white, though, it may be my computer. Tone down the "highlights" (if there are any) 04:40, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 04:51, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't tell anyone, but I forgot the earpink >.> 22:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tone tone the light parts more. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 07:08, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a littlelight part to his back? 03:18, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

The light source is from the front. I think if I add a light source up there it'll look odd. 03:22, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps the middle of his stomach instead? <span style="">03:29 Tue Feb 7

Re-uploaded. 12:17, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur or either lighten the shading just a tad? ^^  21:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:47, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more or soften the highlights a bit 05:08, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:17, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 07:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt.W) - Withdrawn
Was my last post of this approved, declined or just deleted? I don't see it in any of the archives... So am I okay to re-post this? <span style="">08:18, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

I think you are :), well darken the shadings a tad. Nice. 12:07,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Okay, cool. Thanks. <span style="">06:17, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Darken the shading some more. Lovely! 17:39, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. <span style="">05:19, Tue, Feb, 7, 2012

Define the tail shading and blur the earpink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  10:07, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely DJ <3 Define the shading on his face. 06:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Forgot to say Reuploaded -  *facepalm* thanks M-heart. <span style="">06:45, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Blur the earpink. <span style="">21:38 Wed Feb 8

Reuploaded -  :3 I only just realised I've done 2 of Thornclaw's images. XI <span style="">06:26, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Smooth the shading out and make sure the darkness is constant; it looks a bit blotchy 05:09, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Lost all the layers to the image. Wildfire can have this as she pointed the alt out. <span style="">01:04, Sun, Feb, 12, 2012

Ice (Alt. Lo) - For Approval
The collar looks too bulky to me, and hope you don't mind if I changed the pattern a little... Comments? 17:12, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It matches better with the manga picture, so, I'd leave the pattern as is. Move the collar down a bit towards his shoulders and thin out the lineart around the edges, and define the ear-pink 17:14, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think it has to match the manga... 17:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Why is there black stuff on t his collar? 20:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh goodness, I thought this was Snake finally going up again. XD Anyways, I don't know if the changes are showing, but the collar still needs to be moved closer to the shoulder if they are, and yes, it does need to match the manga, though maybe not exactly, at least a bit, and the rogue did so can you keep that pattern? 20:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

...can someone show me how he looks? I don't have the manga, so I don't know. 22:30, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind, I'll match the old version. 01:36, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Didn't he have an underbite when he looked like this? Or was that Snake? 23:57, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like he got shot in his foreleg farthest away from us xD. Blur it/smudge it unless someone else disagrees. 20:23, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shellheart: I don't know. Ivystripe: Just the dirt and germs on the teeth. I made it resemble the old image. 21:33, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur where you smudged the pelt. 23:06, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I never put dirt and grime on the old image. Dirt would be more brown colored but I feel it distracts from the image, but this is only my opinion. 23:32, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It was brown, though I made it lighter. 23:38, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the back of the collar (The part on the top of his neck) stick out like at the bottom. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:13, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

It wouldn't make sense if I did, since his head is hanging down. It would look like the collar is floating. 02:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Well, since there is a tooth/claw there, it would make sense to have the collar pushed up, also since it is connected straight with the lineart it almost looks like the collar is part of the cat itself. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 03:18, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is there any way to satisfy these people? Misunderstanding upon misunderstanding! 18:15, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a tad and then I think this'll be ready 05:10, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smoky (Lo) - For Approval
Hmm....I feel like I messed it up...Comments? 23:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ahah. Figured it out. Re-reuploaded 23:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

The grey should be darker. 02:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the patches in the darker color. 03:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink ^^ 14:55, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:08, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Actually the grey was fine before, now it looks black. What was wrong with it? 23:30, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

It was too light before, and you've darkened it too much. Lighten it just a touch c: 02:10, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded' - How's the color now? 03:39, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit too dark. Lighten it a tad more? 16:11, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 12:30, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fallow, I would, but, m'dear (:3) I got it off the kittypet image. e3e I can change it if someone else agrees. 20:34, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 05:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but blur where the gray meets the white on the hindleg closest to us, and enlarge (not define) the "highlight" on the shoulder. 17:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) ~ For Approval
I like this one. Comments? 20:03, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the earpink. :3 22:38, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

He looks way too dark. I also used the burn tool several times, so please make the spots differing colors and not just one color. 23:10, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink has to be a little more visible ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  04:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, please stop repeating comments. 12:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Redone. Better? 02:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Lighten her more. Maybe don't have the flecks on the highest opacity. 02:36, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste right above the nose. 06:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add some speckles under the lineart instead of stopping before it along the spine please. Also I think there's a speck of waste on the front leg farthest from us. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Lo) ~ For Approval
Its my first tabbie how is it 02:11, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Where was she mentioned as a loner? If this stays up, please, make the white look a little less orange. 02:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Clean up around the back a little; looks like you got a bit out of the lineart. Fix the paws too.

❦ Woo  patch of green  273  02:15, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm I'm not sure. but if she should get one, lighten the stripes, make the ends pointed and blur them. 06:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

She wasn't mentioned as a loner. Declined for now, unless anyone disagrees. 08:48, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, no, she was never a loner. Just BloodClan and then Kittypet. 14:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I thought because she and barley rn from bloodclan but... 21:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, that's not half bad of a point. She and her brother did attempt to flee from BloodClan - so, how exactly would that still make them BloodClan cats? I don't think that automatically means Violet qualifies for the rank of rogue, either. 21:09, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

If she was no other rank and was not violent, such as the point I made with Sasha, then I sincerely believe she would get a loner image. Besides, she doesn't seem like the type to be a rogue and she was forced to be a BloodClan cat against her will. 23:11, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I never really thought all of BloodClan should have rogue blanks for that very reason. It's not like all of them chose to be in BloodClan. I'm not sure how to solve that problem though.... 15:41, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

We made apprentice images for cats who we simply mentioned having a mentor. I havn't read the manga but if there was a point after Violet left the Bloodclan and before she became a kittypet and she wasn't at all involved in Bloodclan affairs, then I think she would qualify for one. 05:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

As far as I know, she didn't actually participate in the affairs of BloodClan. If anything, she was forced to do it, if she did. It's been a while since I've read anything concerning Violet. But, I think this is another Sasha-like ordeal. 05:40, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think she should get both, she was part of Bloodclan and they are bad even if she was forced she should get one. She escaped for a little while=loner. 21:22, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Soot (Lo) ~ For Approval
Well...here she is...Soot! <3 Any comments? 10:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Define the earpink.

Woo patch of green  ❦  13:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken all of the shading. 15:33, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing. 23:50, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 11:48, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink just a little more, to match her kit charart Woo  patch of green  ❦  20:36, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whol eimage just a tad. 21:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt A) - For Approval
Here she is....I realize that the shading could be blurred more, and that I may have gotten the image name wrong, but I will fix that in a moment. Comments? 21:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The filename should be Ivypool.apprentice.alt.png. Just re-upload over this, and you'll be fine. Also, blur the shading. 21:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Cloudskye, for clarifying the file name. 21:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needsto be blended into the pelt a bit more. 23:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and define the nose pink. <span style="">23:53 Wed Feb 8

Define the tail shading. 00:03, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, but still have that "smudged earpink" look. <span style="">06:30, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Lighten the eyes up. They looks rather dark. 22:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes should be fine if you just reverse the depth. It looks better if you have the dark bit closer to the white shiny and the lighter bit at the bottom. <span style="">07:08 Fri Feb 10

The eyes should also be green, as she was mistakenly described with them. 11:48, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste under her chest and a speck of waste along the bottom of the image. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 12:35, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Turns out, I forgot to add the nose pink, and go over detail. I fail. I feel overjoyed. 21:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

If it's a gray cat, then she has a gray nose. Thicken and blur the shading a ton 05:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on this -> ear 21:55, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Speckle (Lo) ~ For Approval
Meh... *shrug* Comments? 22:27, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the flecks. :P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 22:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and blurred the flecks just a tad. 23:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading on the midriff and darken it. 23:48, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. 00:06, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened/blurred the shading on the midriff and brightened the earpink. 01:24, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Do the specks have shading? Cause they kinda get lost in the shaded parts. And make them not all the same size if you can. good job. ^^ 11:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly add some more flecks. 22:33, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shadow (Lo) ~ For Approval
Woo~ I got an original leader! Comments? 00:54, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading <3 00:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:03, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye. Looks really neon. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 10:20, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Colors come right from her leader, Trolly. I won't change the colors, but I could probably play around as to where they're positioned. 17:20, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:23, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. I can barely see the lineart. 21:27, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:45, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the eye colour less lime green. <span style="">02:33 Sat Feb 11

Does no one listen? The colors are right from her leader image. I am NOT changing it. 04:48, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink a tad more 05:14, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:11, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) ~ For Approval
This is Boulder. And comments? Brackentail 02:20, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the heading. Fill in the blank pixels. 02:21, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Very pretty! Smudge the pelt into the earpink and make the eyes not purple. (Whatever his eye-colour is supposed to be.) ;3 <span style="">02:25 Sat Feb 11

Smudge the pelt into the earpink and "shadow" the charart a little. Is this your first? It's pretty good! Woo patch of green  ❦  02:27, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart for the ear got deleted. Woo patch of green  ❦  02:27, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...I honestly think that this may be 50-70% done. 70% actually. Blur the shading, earpink, and make the stripes match the elder's image. You have a week to get this 80% done, or this will be declined. Changed the heading to For Approval. 02:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

The tail lineart looks blurred  04:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Lo. Alt.) - For Approval
*insert Freudian slip Paleh joke here* Welp, not much to say about this one :P 03:22, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white and define the shading on the black. Maybe make two layers of shading? 05:17, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded haha I got this. I just use the eraser with opacity on the white and it works. :P 18:35, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading XP 21:53, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

(darn internet making me post this twice....) Nobody's commented about my mistake yet. XD I was dreading this being put up for nothing. :P Anyways, lighten the tail a bit more, as I said in chat, it looks gray-er than the rest of the white. Lovely job dear. ^^ 03:51, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, I'm getting two totally conflicting critiques and I'm not going to touch it until you guys can agree lol  05:46, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

At least lighten up the black a little c: 05:48, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ki) - For Approval


Dies of friggin' cuteness* Okay, See in the T&S manga, Into The Woods, Page 55 she is seen as a kit. And Paleclaw, Ivystripe, and Skye all agree that she should get a kit image. Comments? Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 05:15, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes, define the ear-pink, blur the muzzle and give some depth in the shading 05:19, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading <3 05:21, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 05:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh chest highlight/shading. You were right, she /is/ cute~ 18:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think the brown muzzle should go down so far. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 18:26, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:20, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still, Blur the shading some more. 07:42, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Alt. Lo) ~ For Approval
Not much to say. Comments? 05:17, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the shoulder and next and define it on the haunch 05:20, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  05:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 01:24, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Moss (Lo) - For Approval
Comments? 17:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely 'Teldy! Tone down the highlights, and lighten the shading on all legs. 17:10, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 21:20, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty~ :3 Blur the ear pink <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 22:28, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Millie (Lo) - For Approval
Ugh.. Moonleaf, I am so sorry I totally wrecked your charart... Comments? 01:39, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hush. This is a pretty charart. Thicken the collar a little bit. 01:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:06, February 12, 2012 (UTC)