Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 216

Snowdrop (KP) - Approved
01:42, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Are the lines/stripes a texture or fur pattern? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  18:56, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the texture a little bit because it's making the image look slightly gray (at least on my screen), and Snowdrop was described as pure white. 20:02, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

That is texture. Can you also define the eye depth a tad more? If not, it's totally fine. ;) 21:51, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you expand the texture to the space of fur between the collar and the cheek? It cuts off abtruptly there  22:43, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just removed the texture altogether. 01:37, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? ​​

Approved

OS-1.warrior-8 - Approved
15:41, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the legs.  Ellie  life is an illusion 17:18, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't define the shading, just fixed some spots up. The shading on the legs is already defined I think, and if I made it any darker it would be too much. However, if anyone else disagrees with me I will define it. 17:37, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Shading looks good to me patch Malina457 (talk) 19:43, March 29, 2019 (UTC)malina

CBA? ​​

Approved

Little gray-and-white kit - Approved
Sweet little boy. I got the file name wrong but I'll change it right now  23:16, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Adorable! Since this has furry shading, the white looks a little off since it's more straight edged and doesn't have any furry-ness to it. Maybe smudge it a bit?

reup I thought something looked off! Thank you  22:58, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

cutie. CBA?

Approved

Muscular tabby (DF) ~ Approved
I did this on the bus lol. 01:41, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Controversial critique, but can you make the eyes less purple? Cats don't have purple eyes, and if you look them up, it's just PSed images. You don't have to do this, however. ;) 02:07, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

The eye's don't look overly purple, Silver Stripe's eyes come to mind, this image is fine Malina457 (talk) 02:35, March 29, 2019 (UTC)malina

This series is unrealistic, and we have at least one character mistakenly mentioned with purple eyes, and one with purpleish-blue eyes. The eyes are fine as they are. ​​

CBA?

Approved

Black ShadowClan Warrior (W) - Approved
this is the warrior that attacks darkstripe :D 03:46 Fri Mar 29 2019

can you smooth out the shading? (lowkey flexing my bright af screen in which i can actually see the shading) 12:33, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded this is as smooth as I can get it in sai? so hopefully that's alright 21:12 Fri Mar 29 2019

CBA? ​​

Approved

Tabby warrior - Approved


Could you define facial shading just a tiny bit? 21:12 Fri Mar 29 2019

Re-uploaded

CBA? ​​

Approved

tabby warrior- Approved
tfw spring break starts and you chose to draw cats over anything else you couldve done 15:00, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading more? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  15:26, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup 15:48, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the eye color some, they seem gray?  Ellie  life is an illusion 17:17, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes are green for me. 22:07, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

yeah they are supposed to be green. i also color picked from a cat. oof i hate ignoring comments, so if someone else agrees ill fix it up 03:14, March 30, 2019 (UTC)

Bout to get shot but I like this. CBA?

APproved