Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Sol (Ki) ~Tweaked
Tweaked for tufted tail tip. Latest OA was Paleh. Changes not showing. 21:17, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Could you try to curve the part where the tuft and the tail meet! It looks a bit crooked 17:50, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing. 22:23, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! The white tail tip looks a bit gray. 23:49, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 00:25, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I can't actually tell if the tail tip is white or not. It seems brown.

I already fixed that; the changes aren't showing,though. 00:29, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I think the changes might be showing now, but it still seems a little gray-brownish? If not, my apologies.

I think it's fine, but I'll wait to see what others think. 18:06, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Skye, it does look a bit gray-brownish. 21:02, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 01:09, August 27, 2013 (UTC)

Lineart gap on the tufted tail. 21:09 Tue Aug 27

Where? I don't see it. 21:56, August 27, 2013 (UTC)

It's just right of the big tuft on the tail. Could you shorten the tail a bit? It's current length just looks a bit unrealistically long. Nice job! 01:49, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, but I'll wait to see what others think. 18:55, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

It does seem a bit long, honestly.

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 19:20, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Can you somehow move the tail <-- probably about two - four pixels? It appears to be bunched up near the pelt. If you think it's fine, that's cool with me.

I think it's fine. 00:26, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

I think that it should be moved, it does look really close to his side. Also, define the shading on his tail. 20:35, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I am not changing the placement or length of the tail AGAIN! Changes not showing. 22:19, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

There's no need to get snippy like that. .-. If someone asks you to change something, clearly, they think it could be changed. You can politely decline, but there is no need for what you said. That being said, the tail shading is still a little flat.

I didn't mean to get snappy; I was just trying to emphasize that I was having trouble. I'm more angry at myself than anyone else, and I'm sorry that it came out like that. I'll get to the shading soon. 22:56, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing, and, again, I'm sorry for getting rather agitated. 23:01, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe make the tail a few pixels farther than the body? This is awesome, Blue. 00:39, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 02:14, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Totally not mandatory, but is the back paw supposed to be white? I can't tell at all, so if you're not busy, could you possibly add a highlight or something to the back foot?

Brook (Lo) Redone
okay 06:26, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad. 20:53, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Define and expand shading tons. gj 21:07 Tue Aug 27

Re-uploaded. I think the shading is fine 08:52, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Can you just define it on her stomach and haunch and face? 21:06, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Thornclaw (A) ~ Redone
Redone because of shading and stripes and everything. Last OA was me. Comments? 04:56, 28, 08, 2013

He be a sexy apprentice too! Darken the shading a bit more and define it on the head 04:59, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Scarly. 8DD 05:11, 28, 08, 2013

Define the shading on the upper part of the tail, perhaps?

Tigerstar (Ro) ~ Redone
OA be Shelly and a few others, redone for the stipes to match his son's. Comments? here are the changes 23:27, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

re-up added nosepink and erased and added some of his cream underbelly, since his leader has some 14:12, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Missing the scar on bridge of the nose. So. Freaking. Sexy. 00:36, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up 00:40, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe try to add and alter some stripes so it matches Hawkfrost more? 20:11, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

I can't, or else it wouldn't match the other images, and I had the .xcf for this, however if someone else disagrees I'll add a few more stripes to make it less empty o3o 21:00, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

If you don't mind? I mean, I think Tiger's other images might have a few more stripes..

Re-up 21:32, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

It seems like the stripes don't really match in places, when comparing it to Tigerstar's warrior, which is facing the same direction. It seems like this has less stripes? Kinda hard to explain it because I'm not feeling well. x.x

Volepaw (SC) ~ Tweaked
Oa be Padfoot, tweaked for flat shading. Changes might not be showing. Comments? 21:03, August 30, 2013 (UTC)