Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 8

Webfoot- Approved
-makes mental note to lay of on tabbies for a while--- Darkhallows Lair 06:50, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

I really like it, except the markings next to the eye don't look right. Make a wave from the eye, and maybe a fork form the whiskers. -- Dawnfeather 06:52, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

The marking on the cheek looks, odd. It looks too much like the actual cheek.Minnowclaw 22:25, 20 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Changed eye mark.-- Darkhallows Lair 07:51, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

It should be longer and in this shape ~ -- Dawnfeather  09:37, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Why lay off on the tabbies? It looks great! Goldencloud 22:13, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

There is some smudging outside of the line art around the tail. Minnowclaw 22:48, 21 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Fixed the smudging and removed the eye-mark. It was too much trouble, and I couldn't get the shape right.-- Darkhallows Lair 07:16, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I think you should try again with the eye mark. I think it really needs it! -- Minnowberry Dawnfeather's Den 10:46, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think so Dawn, it looks good.Minnowclaw 02:48, 25 June 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Added it anyway. (I've had it done for a day or so now.. I must have forgotten to upload...)-- Darkhallows Lair 07:11, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

It should be a tiny bit away from the actual eye - leave a tiny gap of a pixel or two Sandy Talk! 21:43, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?-- Darkhallows Lair 04:26, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

He looks good to me. Nobody else has commented, so 24 hrs starting now. -- Bramble My Realm 16:24, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Bramble My Realm 17:26, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Marshkit - Approved


Tallpoppy's little kit... who disappeared. Comments? Sandy Talk! 12:38, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

The tabby markings could stand out a little tiny bit more. -- Dawnfeather talk! 12:49, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I made them darker if the change ever shows. Sandy Talk! 13:34, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

The eye looks a bit weird. Maybe try something with the pupil or darken the yellow.--Warrior♥ Warrior's Palace 22:30, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

I darkened the eyes and the tabby stripes are showing up darker now too. Anything else? Sandy Talk! 15:41, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't think so. Does anyone else have anything? (I'm really hoping we eventually get to see Marskit and Applekit as warriors, I miss them) -- Bramble My Realm 21:02, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

The pink of the ears is down below the ears. -- Dawnfeather talk! 08:46, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Sorted Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 09:15, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh, wow, I just called Marshkit Marskit. xD He'd be like a little reddish kit with antennae sticking out in place of his ears... (apologies, I just had to point that out.) Image, again looks great Sandy. -- Bramble My Realm 22:29, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Hmm, tough crowd. I was hoping for at least one comment on that. :) Anyways, comments before aproval? -- Bramble My Realm 18:16, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

lol Bramble :p <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 12:21, 29 June 2009 (UTC)


 * I just see that the markings stand out a lot. (lol Bramble, Marskit-a red tomkit with green antennae sticking out where his ears should be, and speaks in a computerized-sounding mew) --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 16:58, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

I know they are Mal... they weren't originally but I was advised to make them darker; this is the least amount I could make them darker by. What do others think? Lighter again or leave them? <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 17:00, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Well, I think their color is fine, maybe blur them just a tad so they don't stand out so much? (lol, thanks for responding to the joke. "I-AM-MARSKIT-TAKE-ME-TO-YOUR-LEADER". Wow, it's a wonder I ever got nominated for leadership... I act like a 9 yr old xD) -- Bramble My Realm 23:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Better? <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 08:32, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

I think so. They certainly stand out less. Repeating 24 hrs. -- Bramble My Realm 16:20, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; approved. -- Bramble My Realm 17:27, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Smallkit - Approved


Here he is, just as I promised. Comments, critism? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 22:56, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Can you make his black patches lighter? It's hard to see the lineart against them. I like their position a lot, though. -- Bramble My Realm 23:11, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 23:41, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it's better. He's very cute. I don't see anything else. -- Bramble My Realm 00:21, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 18:16, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

The patch on our right looks sortof unnatural. Fix that and it would look great. Summer is here  !!!!!!!!!!  20:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Changed it. Anything else? Is it better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 10:12, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hrs. He looks great, Dawn. -- Bramble My Realm 16:23, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments;approved. -- Bramble My Realm 17:28, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Thornclaw - Approved


Well, his brother was being done so I thought it was about time he had an image too. Constructments? <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 20:24, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripe on the hind foot closest to us is... a blob. -User:SparrowWing

I know this isn't mine, but I looked on his hind foot and I don't know what you're talking about, Sparrow. I think he looks perfect, personally. could you explain some more? -- Bramble My Realm 18:16, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Now it looks fine. :-) I was on my other computer and it looked like a big blurry mess. Sorry, it looks great. -User:SparrowWing

No problem Sparrow :) <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 12:17, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

I feel like being extremely picky, so maybe make his ear pink a tad darker? It blends into the pelt at the moment. But I had to look hard to pick that up. :) -- Bramble My Realm 23:24, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

lol Better? <span style="color:DarkBlue;background:LightBlue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DarkBlue;"> Sandy <font color="IceBlue">Talk! 08:28, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

Yep. No one else seems to have a problem, so comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 15:51, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Bramble My Realm 17:29, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Mistyfoot - Approved
Mistyfoot of Riverclan. Awesome cat. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 00:00, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

As the same with Redtail, Mistyfoot is a deputy.--Yai-Girl 15:49, 28 June 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl


 * Mistyfoot was once a warrior, and if this gets approved, I'd be glad to do her deputy pixel since those have been approved if anyone else hasn't reserved it. On the pixel, the color should be a bit more like Bluestar's, and the color has a purple tinge to it. --<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS; color:Silver; background:#6699FF; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Silver;">Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 15:55, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Changed the pelt colour, added highlights because it looked flat without them. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 07:24, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

She looks just as I pictured Mistyfoot to look. Very very pretty. Her pelt even looks misty. -- Bramble My Realm 23:23, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble My Realm 16:21, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Bramble My Realm 17:30, 1 July 2009 (UTC)