Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Mousefang (W) ~ Redone
oa be Skye, redone for multiple issues 23:33, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back ear and smudge the pale chest a little. 00:05, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 01:53, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading on the paw furthest away from us 10:21, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

if you're talking about the back leg there's no light there and frankly considering how most of my other warrior images have this light source I think it's fine 12:35, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I was told that unless the cat is sitting awkwardly, there should be at least some light hitting that back leg.

re-up 22:49, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC) ~ Tweaked
OA is Palelegs, tweaked for white dashes. 06:59, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Y'know, given that she has white splashes, I think you should do something like Toadskip because these look like white flecks now. 07:03, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped ugh 07:12, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you tell me how you made the white splashes please? 07:16, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Add a new layer, paste the original linear art onto it. Underneath the linear art add another layer, for the splashes. Use a hardedged smudge tool and smudge the patches. Then lower the opacity. (I used gimp by the way) 07:20, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you very slightly blur the white splash on her eye? This is also being somewhat picky, but could you also curve the smudges on the white splash on her haunch to match with the flow of the fur? 16:53, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

These kinda look more like patches. I'd think splashes would be a bit smaller and kinda go with the size she already has- like the small, circular dots of color?

Reverted be that was the style it once had (Told you you Fox ._.) 00:19, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Seedpaw (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is me. Tweaked to redo the shading, mostly because it's very dark. Very happy with it now. 07:16, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading to that back front foot plz? I like him too 09:54, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

This definitely matches the other images better, but you lost a bit of depth too. Perhaps add another layer of shading and just darken the spots where the shadows collect the most/the darkest. 16:50, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 21:21, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the tail? Unless it's suppose to be primarily in shading?

Yeah the shading is coming a bit at a bottom left angle, so around the tip of the tail is in more darkness. 21:58, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA is Palelegs, tweaked for white splashes. 07:18, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Similar to the apprentice, could you smudge the patches a bit more and possibly follow the direction of the fur a bit more? I think you could even make the patches a bit smaller, but your choice. =) 16:48, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the others, the splashes should probably be a bit smaller as well.

Re-upped 07:50, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (K) ~ Tweaked
OA be paleclaw. Tweaked for white splashes. I hate Spottedleaf but Spottedkit is cute :3 08:29, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the others, the splashes should probably be a bit smaller as well.

Re-uploaded Shoot, I liked the old splashes 07:57, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) ~ Tweaked
To be admitted, having a sis as a senior warrior is osm :p oa is paleclaw, tweaked for the white stuff. 09:54, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge the patches a bit more please? The patches doesn't really blend into the rest of the image yet. 16:46, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

After you do that, do you mind sending me a file of the white patches? I've got the Medicine cat apprentice and I think sending me the file will get them to match very well (I'm no good with smudging) either that or you tweak it yourself. 21:21, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the others, the splashes should probably be a bit smaller as well.

Re-uploaded Stealth, what is your e-mail? I can send it to you 07:58, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Mousefang (E) ~ Redone
same as above yo 23:15, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Mousefang (Lo) - Redone
OA is me and all colors are from the .psd for the warrior. Yes, they're the same- Beebs' shading is just thicker than mine is.

do you think you can define the shading? I cn't really see it ecxept on the body 02:33, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Spottedleaf (MCA) ~ Tweaked
OA is Stoneclaw33 and tweakers are Paleclaw and Frostheart. Tweaked for white splashes. A huge thanks to Fox for sending the file! 22:03, March 16, 2015 (UTC)