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StarClan - Silver Nomination
Well, all the other non-four clans were being nominated, so I thought I would work on this one. The article looks fine to me, but I have one question. Does the History section need references? There was a comment on the talk page saying we did, and I wasn't sure. I don't think so, but if we do, I will be more than happy to add them. 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, history sections do not need references, but can you add more references for the description sections? 23:31, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

For like Fourtrees and Warm-Rocks? The other description sections have a reference for almost every sentence. 03:23, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

I guess you could, but I'm not sure. Maybe expand The Sight a little more, because Spottedleaf had a big moment. 01:47, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you don't have to cite every sentence, but you should cite every sentence that is unconfirmed or non-obvious. 01:03, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 23:58, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

If he isn't, may I take over? 02:00, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, sure. He hasn't left a comment for a few weeks now. 16:29, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I had this expanded a long time ago x3 Comments? 15:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, XD. Ok, so find another reference for the last sentence in the intro. Then find refs for the last paragraph in territory, Fourtrees, Warm-Rocks, Realtion to Living Cats, Ceremonies, Influence, Life in StarClan, and Other Ancestors. Sorry, I know that's a lot, but if I become inactive again, I'd like to know work is still being done without me having to comment. XD 18:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Done! 01:14, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

A lot of references aren't specific enough like: "Revealed in Night Whispers" or "Such as when Brambleclaw is invited to undertake a quest". The references need to be actual books with page numbers. 01:41, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oops! I forgot. I'll fix those. 20:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I took care of a lot of them. All you have to do is the last paragraph in Life in StarClan and then Other Ancestors. 23:53, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Place of No Stars ~ Silver Nomination
I added the Crookedstar's Promise section in the History and the references. Comments?  Owl   X    G    l    itt    er   4LIFE..    The colors of fall  2:27, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Flesh out Starlight and ''Outcast. ''  Swee  tflo  wer   I'm sweeter than you think! 13:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Add more references to the last apragraph of the Description. I'm pretty sure the territory can be expanded, and references need to be there, too. I think the Dark Forest was mentioned one or two times in the Original Series. I'm not exactly sure, so you should check. 00:09, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I expanded all sections and the Dark Forest wasn't mentioned in the original series.  Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 01:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand SotM? 16:28, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any way you can expand Starlight? 03:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

For SotM the harpercollins isn't working so might take a little longer and I'll get to doing Starlight right now. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  00:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Did Starlight <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 06:11, October 7, 2011 (UTC) Have you done Outcast yet? Just wondering. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 02:01, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I did Outcast but there wasn't much times the Place of No Stars was mentioned. I got to doing Sign of the Moon eventually. Comments? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 04:26, October 9, 2011 (UTC) Could you get The rest of the history at the same level you have for Sign of the Moon? 07:00, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Robin is right. I'm pretty sure everything can be expanded without focusing on a particular cat. 00:01, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beech copse ~ Silver Nomination
So, I expanded it like crazy, added all the needed citations, and added a description. Comments? 00:06, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Expand uses and description if you can, other than that I like it! Nice work! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 02:12, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add anything else to the intro? Not a lot, just another sentence would be fine. Also, I don't know if the links in the See Also section really fit for the article. But other than that, it looks great from when Icestorm first made it not so long ago! Great job! 02:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible for you to add more references to Uses? If not that's okay. 07:05, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's fine since pretty much every sentence is cited except the first, and that can't really be cited anyway. 00:03, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded the intro. Comments? 20:42, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! CBV? 20:42, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:46, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

ShadowClan ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded everything. Yes, including SotM which really doesn't have any other info about ShadowClan in it. It matches the other silver Clans almost perfectly, so I think it deserves silver, too. 01:53, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Firestar's Quest and Crookedstar's Promise? Other than that it looks good. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r  Calling all  the monsters! 02:08, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I really can't expand Crookedtstar's Promise. They posed lots of threats to ThunderClan, but not a lot to RiverClan. and if you recall, Firestar's Quest was mostly about Firestar and SkyClan, with hardly any mention of ShadowClan in it. 02:11, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

That's good than! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 13:31, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Any other comments? 18:43, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find more cites for the Description section? 07:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Every sentence in this description section is cited, just indirectly. Every sentence up to cite note 1 is cited with cite note one. The only reason it looks like there's not enough citations is because I didn't want to cite every sentence with the same reference. 00:04, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? 01:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, CBV? 20:39, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:54, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Rat ~ Silver Nomination
(I'm looked at the guidelines first :) And I'm pretty sure it follows the, if not I'm a fail xD) Comments?   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 00:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, you read the guidelines! XD Ok, so you need references for the introduction, Description,a dn Relation to Cats. Also, look at Wolf, Sheep, and Beaver to see what the Description section really means. It needs to be kind of like a research article with real information, not just from the books. Try to model this article after the ones I showed you. Even though this needs work, it won't be declined because it technically does follow the Guidelines, just needs to be tweaked to fit the other Silver articles. 05:27, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I did! And ok I'll start doing that now. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 18:10, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

SquirrelFlame, do you think you could help me? Please? S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 00:44, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, that took a while. Ok, Description section's all done. You don't have to worry about that anymore. 02:16, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks SquirrelFlame, I  really  appreciated that :D. I'll get started on some of the other stuff that needs work on it. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 22:15, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 21:02, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

You need references for the introduction and Relation to Clan cats section. 00:02, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Great Clans
Should there be a history added to Great Clans, since it needs expanding? 05:52, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. This page needs a Description section and a History section. 06:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Loner ~ Silver Nomination
I added references everywhere and added loners that weren't even on the page yet. I spent a lot of time deciding how to organize them, and I also expanded the In the Books section. There's no specific layout in this in the Guidelines, so I think it' good to go. Comments? 02:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Is the intro in the In the Books section ment to be there? There is also quite a few spelling and grammar errors, you might want to check over that. Other than that, looks good! 07:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, that intro is meant to be there. Also, I only got three or four spelling mistakes in the whole article so that's not really quite a few. Anything else? 00:11, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Leaving
Explanation on PCA talk, but, anyways, I'm leaving the wiki, so, please remove me from the project. Bye guys. <font color="white" style="background:black">☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:17, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll remove you. You have been a valuable member of this wiki for a long time, and will be greatly missed. Good luck in life! 21:21, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

FA November 2011
So, its time to start discussing the Feature Article. Any suggestions? 21:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Whispering Cave or DarkClan or maybe even BloodClan? S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 22:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it would be nice to do a Clan since we've never done one before. People also have been nominating the Clans more recently, so we could do one of the mythological clans such as TigerClan, LionClan, or LeopardClan. 00:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't we do BloodClan? It seems to be the longest article. 20:44, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

BloodClan sounds good. Lets get some more opinions. 20:46, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

I like BloodClan. How about ThunderClan if it hasn't already been featured. It is the longest article and looks good to me? <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 01:19, October 15, 2011 (UTC) ThunderClan sounds good, too. :P Maybe we can do that next time? 01:46, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, I was thinking maybe LeopardClan next month, but back to this month, ThunderClan is good too, but I think BloodClan might be better, it relates to Rememberance Day, sorta :P   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 20:39, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

So ThunderClan or BloodClan? It seems OwlxGlitter and I want ThunderClan and Mistystar and Sweetflower want BloodClan. Let's wait for one more person to decide. 00:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

ThunderClan is fine. We can do BloodClan next month, or LeopardClan. 22:31, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I like ThunderClan and BloodClan, I'd like either of them. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall

08:10, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

ThunderClan. I like the article a lot, I actually just read it, and I think it would make a good FA for this month. 11:13, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Great Clans ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded it a lot, added a Description and History section, and fillied in the Canon Great Clans with more detail. 01:36, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you add any more detail to Dawn and Outcast? I know they're short, so if you can't, its fine. 22:33, October 18, 2011 (UTC)