Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 176

Slash (L) ~ Approved
...woW 01:18, 5/12/2017

There's strange patch of darkness above the --> back leg... was that intentional? It looks darker than most of the rest of the shading. Branchwing (talk) 14:52, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Yes its shading depth 02:12, 5/13/2017

It looks out of place compared to the rest of the shading, though. Could you smooth it out a bit?

Define the shading depth on the tail? This must have been difficult to pull off^ It's very pretty! 23:29, 5/13/2017

Smooth the markings n paler parts out a tad to better match the other images 23:33, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head. ErmineGlow (talk) 23:44, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Also, define the shading depth on the flank and > front leg 23:46, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The higher scar on <- front leg should be closer to the white stripe below it and I think the three scratches on the back leg should look like this http://vvcap.com/w09l8ZisTwf and should be a bit longer

Reuploaded Smoothed everything including little patch of shading above > back leg, defined depth on tail, the head shading didn't really need defining but i put some more shading depth there, and the flank is the part above the leg, danny, and that's pretty defined as is, considering branchwing's comment. and the front leg doesnt need any shading depth in my light source but i gave it a tiny bit. And fixed scars. it doesnt have to match 100% you know @snow (about the length), and besides his leg is curled up, theyre gonna be scrunched together 22:40, 5/14/2017

CBA?

Approved 04:12, 5/18/2017

Loki (Ro) ~ Approved
I dunno if the shading's too dark, because my monitor won't let me see it properly.

You need the hex codes for the fur, eyes or earpink at all? 01:28, 5/12/2017

Minor, but the nose should be a very dark red. 01:29, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Here's the hex code for the nose: 0d0504 Here's for the earpink:ab4538 And here's for the eyes: 9cff00 (shading tint is optional but here: 6f4dff) 01:34, 5/12/2017

Smooth the earpink a little more, shading is leaking on the belly by the back leg's bend, and define the shading on the front leg farthest from us 01:41, 5/12/2017

re-up @Broken I have the exact same hex code? The tint is probably throwing the pink off. Also define what you mean by leaking @Snow.

Leaking shading means exactly what it sounds like? It's leaking away from the lineart on the --> back leg's bend?? Unless you changed it already 07:20, 5/12/2017

Leaking shading means the shading doesnt go all the way where its supposed to. Also no broken its not by the back legs bend if you wouldve looked at my comment :/ i said on the belly by the back legs bend 12:27, 5/12/2017

Funny, front leg farthest from us is covered in shading, and I don't see the shading leaking on the belly near the back leg? Unless I'm just stupid?

Wait, I just checked the current projects list. It says Streamdapple had reserved this on the 2nd, while you reserved it recently... am I missing something, or isn't it theirs? 03:01, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

It was declined (and archived) due to lack of work, and an image is someone's until it's archived, so...does that answer your question? (unless I'm just answering this wrong)


 * Yes that does answer it. Thank you, and sorry. :) 05:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

you're welcome Winter. :)

Smooth shading on head a bit and shading is leaking a bit on both front legs

re-up yeah I forgot to put it because I'm out of order because I'm kinda sick. :(

Maybe smooth the shading on the main body and shoulder a bit? 20:49, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a more gray color than what it is now? It looks a little too neon to match the other image. The earpink you want to match is on > ear of the kittypet, and right now it looks too purple 21:37, 5/15/2017

Winter, Broken gave star the exact hex code, so it's probably the tint on the kittypet that makes it look odd 22:08, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Yeah, the tint's throwing the earpink off. Also, Broken's image was fine with it, so *shrugs*.

CBA? 00:57, 5/17/2017

Approved 04:12, 5/18/2017

Hopekit (Ki) - Approved
I know the shading needs to be fixed and I'll get to that in a bit I just wanted to get this up 23:28, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

reups "fixed" shading. It's still bad but oh well. 23:42, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

darn I wanted this image Smooth out that little chest/belly shading?

reups heck sorry 23:53, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define stripes, unless I'm stupid and blind and they're not stripes? me 2 --

How would I do that though? They're the same color as the star, should I sharpen them? 00:47, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

on the star, the stripes seem to be um... thicker? maybe that would help. holy #@##$ this is super cute

Okay, I know you must've colorpicked, but this seems paler from the Star, unless it's my eyes again xD 04:20, 5/13/2017

Unfortunately, I disagree with you. The base color seems the same, it's just the tint that looks different.

I'm gonna reup soon, I lost this file and recovered an older version so I'm redoing the shading, but, yes, Broken I colorpicked from the most unshaded untouched spot I could find on the back. If this continues to be a problem, I'll try and get the star's file from Shrikestep 14:18, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups 14:33, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the stripes that are under the shading, as they seem to fade away a bit in shape

reups 15:03, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

reups waste and the belly shading was bothering me 18:04, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

I like this. Comments before approval? 17:50, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Approved 04:12, 5/18/2017

Juniper Branch (W) ~ Approved
a simpler one 18:54, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define light on the tail? It looks wholly coated in shadow. --

Not really? You can see the light on > side of the tail because of the pattern 21:28, 5/15/2017

Define the shading depth just a smidge 23:01, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded' 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">00:59, 5/17/2017

Approved <span style="">04:12, 5/18/2017