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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Honeyleaf (Ro) - For Approval
Won't be able to reupload Mon-Fri because I'm going camping.  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 15:23, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker and softer, looking at her deputy and loner. 15:25, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Expand the shading on the tail and the foreleg furthest from us. 21:04, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body and haunch area, bit sharp there. The shading everywhere else though looks fine. You're doing a great job so far! 21:58, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste beside the hind leg closest to us.  Crystie  Can't help loving  me  01:43, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah sorry, should be reuploaded by tomorrow. <font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:36, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Smooth the shading a bit on the shoulder and hind leg closest to us? Nice work! 03:22, July 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups

There's shading leaking from the lineart on the paws, and smooth the shading on the flank/stomach? 00:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the haunch and all legs except for the front leg farthest from us. 22:24, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Define the light on the main body and haunch more, amd smooth out the shading on the front leg closest to us. 14:21, July 20, 2019 (UTC)

Hollowbelly (W) - For Approval
he hungry boy 03:27, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a little bit of white to his stomach? 02:04, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the white a little bit more. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:05, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:37, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Minnowtail (W) ~ CBA
i always wanted to do one of her images!

CBA?

Leafpool (W) ~ For Approval
not a fan of this

Brighten up the paw white on the back paw closest to us a little bit? 14:13, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a bit more...brittle? So to speak. They got a bit more sketchyness to them. I think on some of them, the OA used like a fine faint pencil tool with the base color and drew over the stripes to get that effect. Maybe that'll work? Also the tips of the ears should be dark brown, and can you thicken the facial stripes a bit? Overall, this is very good ^^ 02:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks Vec for the advice!

Define the shading a little more? <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:06, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Lionblaze (W) - CBA
Lionblaze!! 13:35, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like the stripes are slightly softer on the apprentice 16:04, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 16:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I love this. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Mothflight (Ki) - For Approval
ADHD icon. 17:32, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Recede how high the shading goes on the haunch just a little bit^^

Reuploaded. 00:04, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Molewhisker (TC) (Ki) - CBA
17:32, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:55, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Molewhisker (TC) (W) - CBA
17:32, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tops of the hind paws should be brown. 22:03, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. They were, but I guess when I blurred the cream it spread a lot higher, so I receded the cream. 23:37, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:56, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Larksong (SS) (K) - CBA


17:59, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Larksong (SS) (W) - CBA


17:59, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:45, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (W) - CBA


17:59, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:46, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
All colors from original image. Comments? 18:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:46, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but, could you define/add more depth to the chest/mane area? It looks flatter in comparison to the other darker spaces in the image

Mistystar (Alt. Ki) ~ CBA
All colors from alt warrior. Comments? 18:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading a bit more. 19:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:15, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Tansypaw (Ki) ~ CBA
All colors from original image. Comments? Also, I realize the stripes don't quite match the other images, but when we added stripes to these, the original kit was the first to be posted. So shouldn't those match this? 18:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I think the rest of the set should match the og kit. CBA? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) ~ For Approval
an attempt was made.. 19:02, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

She needs stripes and dapples on her tail, the base is also a tad too gingery. 19:07, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading also appears very blotchy and uneven. Also, can you define the light in the eyes? 02:18, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes and dapples seem darker

Re-Uploaded! I wasn't exactly sure what you meant by the 'stripes and dapples seem darker' thought?? 14:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

seem darker on her other images. sorry, not sure why I didn't finish that sentence

The stripes/dapples appear rougher on the other images in the set. 14:26, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 15:00, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes should still be a little rougher. On the MC they look like they were smudged back and forth some. 02:00, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Lionheart (W) ~ For Approval
No joke this took hours but it's finally done. I was a bit confused which stripes to match...since the set doesn't really match exactly so I guessed rip. 19:24, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the old warrior+deputy before the deputy blank redos are the first in this set. ​​​​​

seems like the only other image that shows this side is the star.

I used a mix of the star, old warrior, and apprentice when creating the pattern. I attempted to go off the star for some (mostly the legs, face, and some of the tail), but as I looked closer, I am convinced the stripe style doesn't match. The stripes are overblurred, and more linear/streakier on the star, rather than the irregular and bulbous shapes on the other images. But if others disagree, I can always give it another shot. ^^ 17:00, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, I'd match the old warrior/deputy and apprentice instead of the Star, 'cause it doesn't match these other images closely as it should.

Also, should the lineart for his mane match Bluestar's one for his alt. warrior per the new ruling?

Lionheart (K) ~ CBA
I don't think I add the ragged fur because the cite was from when he was a 'paw but I'm too tired at this point lol. 19:24, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 03:30, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Mintfur (RC) (W) ~ CBA
I guess the two Mintfurs fought and he lost 20:46, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 03:29, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Lioneye (Ki) ~ For Approval


21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

The stripe color seems a bit off (could be my eyes), and the stripes also appear sharper and rougher (instead of smooth and sleek) as well. 02:20, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

21:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes that I have on the unknown file is #d28121, they look a little too pale on this. The earpink looks a bit darker too, could you make it a little brighter? 03:39, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) ~ For Approval


21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined + smoothed a little 02:05, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Molewhisker (RC) (W) ~ For Approval


21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt. W 3) - For Approval
how did they make her ginger 21:35, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

She's honestly supposed to be Honeypaw lol Can you define the eye depth? 03:47, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  then they should have made her Honeyplum lol -- 03:52, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

If it helps, the hex code for the ginger to match the manga is #EC7B32, which is just ever-so-slightly different to what you've got at the moment. :D

can you lighten the eye color some? I can't really tell it apart from the pupil <span style="">07:12 Wed Jul 24

Morning Whisker (K) - For Approval
<span style="">23:53 Mon Jul 22

Do you want the file for the star? used the same colors as Beebs' old kit, except i can't find that file anymore. There should be more brown on the face

reuploaded i dont thiiink i need the file, but if anyone thinks the colors are off i'll take it <span style="">05:39 Wed Jul 24

The white doesn't seem as smudge near the tail per the Starclanner, its a little smoother transitioning from the white into the brown.

Lilyheart (W) - For Approval
18:17, July 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think on the others of this set the stripes are a little smoother 02:09, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I also think the stripes are thinner, too, on the rest? 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Macgyver (W) - For Approval
18:17, July 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Mousewhisker (W) - For Approval
18:17, July 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation
it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. top left corner. 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good!

Mapleshade (Alt. K) - For Approval
baeby

Define the shading on the ginger a bit? 00:03, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

Mapleshade (Alt. W) - For Approval
also apologies, but, her stripes are hard to match

Same thing as I said on the kit image. 00:03, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

Lionblaze (W) - For Approval
fluff. 20:58, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Mistystar (K) - For Approval
22:51, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Almost the same comment as the warrior; define the overall shading depth, and eye depth too a little (I'm aware its a small space though)

Mistystar (W) - For Approval
22:51, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

I would shrink the pupils some - and the white in them as well. It leaves little room for the eye color, and since many of the other images in this set don't have ones so large, it doesn't make sense for this one to have ones much larger since they wouldn't change.

Reuploaded  23:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could add/define the depth on the front legs? Maybe adding a third layer to add some more depth to the dark areas might help with that, as it looks a little flat at the moment. Could you also define the eye depth too?

Leafpool (K) ~ For Approval
01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body should be thinner (you may have to add more after that), and the tips of the ears should be dark brown, too. 03:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Nightstar (K) ~ For Approval
01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little duller than the rest of the set. This looks very good! 03:40, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Flamepelt (W) - For Approval
04:36, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Mistmouse (W) - For Approval
referenced the tunneler <span style="">06:13 Wed Jul 24