Talk:Bluestar/Archive 1

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Information Check: Book Appearances
I'd just like to note that I'd like her Dead Book Appearance checked over. She needs to acctually appear in the book (as more than a passing mention, like, acctually an appearance as the character) for it to count.

I am not sure about her Dawn and Moonrise appearances, but I know she appears in Midnight, Starlight, and Twilight. I'll try and get exact cuts from the text later, and I'll work on the style if I have a chance. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 21:21, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

STYLE CONCERNS

 * History needs breaking up by book.
 * I'd appreciate it if someone could critique the Into the Wild section and let me know here if there is anything that should be added, removed, or changed. Thanks. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 02:30, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
 * It's kinda... too long. We're not re-writing the books ;) Just explaining that characters input on it. Some brevity and division into a few paragraphs (highlighting the major points) wouldn't go amiss. Kitsufox 01:22, 20 May 2007 (UTC)
 * I noticed that, but I wasn't sure if I should change it or not. I see what you mean. I'll try and summarize it a little more, and condense the writing a bit. It's kind of late, though, so I'll work on it tomorrow. Hobbes15 ( Tiger Headquarters ) 02:10, 20 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Complete history
 * Shorten Into the Wild Section, as it's a HUGE thing, and we know a lesser character didn't really spend that much time on camera to have done that much in the story. Eu