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Mist (KP) Kittypet ~ For Approval
Welp. I tried... 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged the collor. 02:49, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg, and blur/smudge the transitions between the colors on the collar if you can. It still looks a bit hard-edged. 02:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged it more and did some stuff :P 03:10, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

The color needs to match his other images, so it has to be lighter. 14:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Add some more light on the tail and add some shading to the collar. 21:45 Sat Mar 7

Tiger, Mist has no other Kittypet images. So I don't know the original collar colour. 21:34, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, I mean the body color, not the collar. It needs to match the loner and kit images, so it needs to be a lighter shade of gray. I suggest to colorpick it. 21:44, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I'll brighten up the collar later. Couldn't change collar colour because I don't know what it originally was :/. (I'll clear the waste in the next upload) 22:05, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 2nd try... 22:17, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Since apparently I needed to move the files, this has now been renamed to Mist (KP).kittypet.png.

Lighten him up more, hes still quite dark as he is now. 01:02, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 05:00, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up the shading as well 18:01 Mon Mar 9

re-up Any better? I lightened up his fur colour from the kit image. 22:47, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading makes it look like he has a dark stripe down his back, kinda like Graystripe.

How do I change it? Do I lighten it up, Smudge, blur... 23:19, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I hit publish without reading over my comment. x.x Yes, lightening it should probably do the trick.

re-up Lightened the shading. 23:31, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and light on the tail and define the light on the foreleg? 19:18, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up Boop 18:13, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Give the shading a little bit more blur, and also delete some waste around his right back knee, it’s just sudden shading that I don’t think belongs there. 07:31, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Give his eyes a little more depth? 13:54, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Depth as in..? 14:34, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Depth is the gradient of the shading from light to dark. I think the depth looks fine but could you maybe define the shading a little on the legs? 14:38, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Would you be a pal and shading to his back leg? 08:36, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

I don't understand where the light is coming from due to the shading on the haunch, face, and tail. 17:04, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading? I'm sorry if I sound like I'm nagging your image ;.; I actually really like how you did it 11:02, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit... too dark. Try lightening it up? Sorry, I may not have the right to comment because I'm not active, but the shading could be lightened up a few percents in transparency. -- 15:48, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine to me but if ya want to, go ahead. Either is fine by me. Could you define the lightsource for me? I'm having trouble seeing what direction it's coming from clearing. 18:40, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up 1st: Changed the eye colour and position because the loner and kit images had brighter eyes; 2nd: I wanted to try to figure out how Beebs did her shading on the Mist she did(didn't work out). 3rd: I dont know if I answered everyone's replies... 20:12, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, and also define the shading on his visible front leg. 02:23, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

I think the eye deapth is fine on my Mac computer, PC, and Mobile. I'll get to the shading tomarroww. 02:27, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt MCA) ~ For Approval
Feels weird to be posting this so soon. Anyway, credits to Foxy for finding the cite, she was called pale so... Comments? I'm super proud of this. 04:59, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Was she called pale or pale gray? if it was pale grey then you'd have to remove the stripes 10:08, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

She was called pale, not pale gray. 10:42, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

While we're at it, can you make her eyes dark blue? Just fits with the trivia. 21:45, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

*steals* This is way too pretty! Define the shading on the...neck/chin? Not sure if you have to just a suggestion. 03:56, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I liked her with green eyes ;_______________________________________; Added some depth. 08:14, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

she has a kit alt for being called pale grey and that doesnt have stripes? 21:03 Thu Mar 12

I already said above, she was called pale, not pale grey. 00:02, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Looks fluffy! Should she have nose pink? -- ☾ Sunstream  ❄ Watching the Snow Fall 02:48, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

No, it's not essential. 04:56, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

what are you talking about? these blanks specifically have space for nosepink and it should be filled in. 13:22, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Okay I always seen cats with noses that aren't pink and I didn't add it for a bunch of my images but okay. 14:42, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

its not that it has to be pink it just has to be filled in. 14:44, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Makes the eyes a darker shade of blue please. I love what you've done! 07:31, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I think it's fine. They are dark enough to me. But thank you~ 07:48, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Does the cite say she has blue eyes on the same page (or near it) that she's called pale? Because if not, I really think you should stick with her cited eye color- which is green.

Re-upped Why was even I told to change it in the first place 08:07, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a couple of ticks on the opacity bar? Not too much- I just think it's a bit dark in some places, namely --> side of the face, stomach, and maybe the tail.

Re-upped 02:42, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

ok i know she was called pale and not pale grey but she has a kit alt for being called pale and that doesnt have stripes. im just saying you should probably match the other alt she has for being called pale grey. i really like the striped though 03:14 Tue Mar 17

Pale isn't pale grey, if she was called pale then she gets what's in her description. Alts don't even have to match each other in the first place, why are you so determined to make me remove the stripes??? ._. 03:49, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

If she's only called pale, the fact that she's still a tabby exists- she's just called a pale tabby. The stripes are staying unless something from whichever book that was contradicts it.

I'm sorry if it seems like I'm determined to remove them, I was just trying to explain my argument. Sorry. 21:14 Tue Mar 17

Cloudy Sun (Ancient) ~ For Approval
The shading is crap 08:56, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Where's the light source coming from? I'm confused as to where it is. Maybe darken the shading and make sure it's on the right spot. 09:43, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

It's coming from <== and I'll darken it in a sec 09:57, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I will not darken it anymore, if that's ok. It'll look really disgusting. 09:59, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add shading around the front left leg and around that? It just shows me there is two light sources or something. Same with the side/belly. 10:00, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope this is what you mean... I thought it looked fine in the first place but it'd be better to change it. 11:58, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes just a smidge, they dont look as blurred on her other image. This is pretty. =) 00:35, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you =) 04:39, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

You can probably sharpen them a little more. Simultaneously, you might also want to taper the stripes out more seeing as they come to more of a point on the elder while yours are rather curved. Could you also possibly define the shading, or darken the spots where the shadows are most likely to collect. 17:02, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:22, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out and blur the shading i think you should tint the shading bc imo blackshading looks bad on cream cats but ill probably get yelled at because its not mandatory and im fully aware it isnt its just a suggestion 03:18 Tue Mar 17

The black shading looks fine, and the cat is orange, not cream. 04:02, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Burnt, you kinda need to calm down. But Gia, that was a little rude. You shouldn't say that a certain color of shading I used looks bad on my image .-. I'll reupload now. 04:05, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not tinting the shading bc it looks fine and it doesn't look awkward 04:16, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

tbh Gia's comment was rude- please disregard it. Shading tiny isn't mandatory and I actually think this turned out really well. Would you object to lightening the shading by just a tiny bit, though? It looks kinda dark, but that could be my iPhone.

Re-uploaded Thank you Cloudy :) 08:31, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

sorry if you thought it was rude i was just stating my opinion. 11:42 Tue Mar 17

It was rude, you clearly stated that Foxy's shading looked bad by saying black shading looked ugly. I also suggest you to watch your use of comas- some users take it as if you were ridiculing them.- blur the tail shading. 11:51, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:06, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Again, I apologize for making a rude comment. I didn't mean to say it looked ugly, I just think it could have been better with tinted shading, my opinion. I'm fully aware that it was a rude comment. Could you explain what you mean by "comas"? I don't understand. 21:16 Tue Mar 17

Unless you plan on critiquing the image as well (and not saying how the image "could have been better" with tinted shading- that's an opinion, not a critique), please take that conversation elsewhere. This is the approval page and all comments must be directed towards the image in question.

Not using comas in a sentence might seem like you are ridiculing people in a condescending way. E.g. Are you sure bc I think it's fine but yeah. Some find it acceptable, others don't. But I'm sure Foxy was fine with it. I don't know, but I was only suggesting you to be a little bit more careful. I'm sure it was just a slip off of words though =) 23:26, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't know that. BTW, it's spelled commas not comas, just so you know. Define the shading on the <== front leg. arent critiques pretty much opinions though?? i mean some people can think that it should look one way but others dont. just how i see it 23:37 Tue Mar 17

I said take it elsewhere- Burnt, that includes you. Go discuss this on your talk pages.

I can see the shading on that font leg fine, but Foxy could you blur the ear shading more, and the shading is leaking away on the stomach. 00:12, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:52, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) ~ For Approval
19:23 Sat Mar 14

Lighten him up a tiiiiinnnnnyy bit. Looks a little too dark. 19:48, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Um, hes a black cat, so of course hes dark. I think the darkness is fine tbh. Define the light/shading on the tail please. 04:34, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the earpink more. 00:22, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I color picked off of his rogue so the darkness should be fine. 21:03 Tue Mar 17

Willowshine (Alt. MC) ~ For Approval
I'm back! With my first medicine cat up for approval. First time I've drawn a tabby without copying off another image. 23:11, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the white on the muzzle more and define the shading on the legs behind the the body. Define the shading on the tail aswell. Make the stripes more hard edged. 23:40, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:53, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the stripes more to give them a more realistic feel. Also, try to vary the stripes in shape and size maybe? I'm sorry if that sounded offensive ;.; 08:35, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

^^ It didn't sound offensive to me, just very vague, The Fox Girl. =) You might also want to think about adding more stripes, some smaller, some larger, etc. Experiment with it. =) 16:58, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I redid the tabby stripes, much happier with it now. I've also added a bit of highlights on a few bright spots, to add some depth. 21:51, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and darken the shading a bit. 00:33 Mon Mar 16

Reupload Added some highlights to the face for more depth, and made the paws lighter because it was a bit hard to tell they are supposed to be paler. 01:38, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Isn't it supposed to match the one Burnt did? Anyways, I thought her eyes were said to be remained green ?o? Good work, though. Maybe add some eye depth :) 06:20, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload No, this is for the ultimate guide where she is shown as light gray tabby with dark blue eyes. 06:27, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Give the white muzzle and the stripes a little smudge/blur? I'm sorry if I seem like I'm commenting too much! ;.; I really love this, well done. 11:03, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Of course not! I'm glad you're commenting and making this picture better. :) 21:56, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more to make them look more realistic. 00:23, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:32, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Hmmm... I can't see any change. Try using a hard edged smudge tool at size 1px in gimp and smudge it towards the direction of the fur. 02:52, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

I prefer not to. I've done a few tabbies with only blurring. (PAINT.NET really needs a working smudge tool) anyway, you want me to blur it more? 03:27, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add or define more shading to the far legs? The still seem.. bright. 14:32, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look fine to me. 21:21 Tue Mar 17

What do you mean far legs? The back legs or her right legs? 21:58, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

The back legs, Stealth. Its so hard to explain Dx 23:45, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

k if this one isn't matching ny other image, then the stripes don't have to be smudged. its doesn't matter about 'realism', it matters tht it looks like a tabby, which it does. stop insisting people smudge everything. 00:06, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload With all the images I've made/tweaked, I only needed to smudge once, and that was to match another image. 05:23, March 18, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Ancient) - For Approval
Um. I don't have the brush I used before, so I tried to improvise. All colors, including the shading, are from the other image...it's just how I shaded on the two different images.

Define the shading on the stomach and back ear. Should she have a pink or black nose. And her tounge should be coloured pink aswell, shouldn't it? On the other hand, beautiful! 23:00, March 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hide the nose pink layer while I was shading oops.

Define and blur/smudge the shading everywhere, 00:32 Mon Mar 16

Where is your light source coming from? Damn it, this is way better than mine ;.;  10:50, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Same source that I've been using since these blanks were made- I was told it was fine. Don't ask me the direction, I couldn't tell you. I'll reupload with the shading in a bit- I just got home.

I think you could define the stomach shading a tad more.. 15:18, March 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

I feel like there are a few strips of pixels that aren't shading in when they are meant to be. They are on the tail and on the cheek, and do you think you could define the shading on the back foot 00:17, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Next time, please be more specific- that was a bit too vague and I'm not even sure I got the pixels you said.

Could you smudge the patches a bit more? They look a little softer on her other images if ya get me, if not I'm sorry I'm bad at explaining stuff. This is gorgeous, lovely job Cloudy. =) 15:12, March 17, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading just a tad 21:18 Tue Mar 17

Re-uploaded. They're actually more blurred on her queen image, so that's what I went with.