Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Boulder (R) - Redone
- Redone to match other images. I made it match the elder image. Comments? (Changes might not be showing. I'll add the pale belly in later. Also, if this is not approved by the 20th, someone may take over.) 23:38, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Changes probably aren't showing so you might want to ignore this but lighten him up a bit. 03:52, 19, 08, 2012

Well, I probably should have uploaded the internal link, but here it is. 22:05, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back paws. 22:52, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Here. 23:51, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add the pale parts in? 15:17, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make his stripes match his other images more? And possibly make him a bit lighter :) Looks great otherwise! -- 16:38, August 20, 2012 (UTC)

Try smudging the stripes a tad. That might work c: 08:37, 23, 08, 2012

Well since Icy said if this wasn't approved by the 20th that someone could take over. So if it's alright, I'll take over this. 22:45, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I suck at rogue shading... :I Ah well. Comments? 08:44, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading on the back and legs to match the darkness on the head and tail? 18:39, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Brindleface (Alt Q) ~ Tweaked
I swear on my life this is tweak. If anyone has any doubts, I'll email them the .xcf so they can see. All I did was go over the image with a small galaxy brush on GIMP for the mottled and defined the sjading. Comments? 08:41 Sun Aug 19

Changes aren't showing. e.e 08:41 Sun Aug 19

Waste. Waste everywhere. 12:36, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'd removed it before...on the .xcf e.e -is a total derp- 12:40 Sun Aug 19

Can you somehow make the circles around the eyes a little lighter or darker maybe? It kinda looks like blurred lineart. 13:16, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on her tail. -- 16:17, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 16:21, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more, if you can. 23:50, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. 11:38, August 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working, Berry? 14:37, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine. However, can you make it larger (if you want to)

Did you add stripes? I thought we agreed that her image didn't need them.... plus, it doesn't say that on the nomination page as to why it needed tweaked. o.o

Declined due to the one week limit for tweaks.

I can take this over. 02:04, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Go ahead. I changed the heading to Tweaked. 05:08, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Loudbelly (E) - Tweaked
I know this looks redone, but it's not. The shading couldn't be salvaged, but the eyes and earpink haven't been changed (except for the earpink being darkened a smidge). Colors should be the same since they were colorpicked off the warrior. 16:42, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading 00:55, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look purple. (unless it's my comp.) 15:17, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

It's not you're computer, I see it too. Blur the earpink more. 00:38, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (A) - Tweaked
Pale underbelly was added and the shading was given an orange tint to match the warrior. OA of this and Loudbelly are me (I'm too lazy to go add this to Loudbelly lol) 16:50, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink on ---> side. 17:35, August 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some. 01:03, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Q) ~ Redone
I mighta forgotten to save the xcf....DX Oa was Scarlet, I think? Idk. 06:19, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Add some raggediness to the tail and while you at it, blur the tail shading a teeny bit. :3 06:20 Fri Aug 24

Re-uploaded. Feh. I knew I forgot something. 07:05, August 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 03:47, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

The rogue appears a bit blurrier and more smudge with the markings, could you match it a little more? 03:57, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded .w. 06:12, August 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. It blends in with the brown on her ear :3 00:33, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No moar defining or I'll die k 07:20, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnflower (Q) ~ Tweaked
Defined shading, OA was Rainwillow. Comments? 13:05 Sat Aug 25

Blur the shading. :3 13:10, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded asdfghjkl I hate you, GIMP >.< 13:33 Sat Aug 25

Fill in the white pixel on the front paw closest to us. And blur the transition from the gray on her paws to her main pelt color. 15:11, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. 17:56, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in the nose. 21:02, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading. 21:40, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken her a bit to be more grey like the elder? 22:25, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (E) ~ Tweaked
Leggy let me do this. (ilu Leggy and you're sexxu and I am not worthy of you ;u;) And Cloudy let me change the pattern *insert Leggy's comment here* ilu them both <333 I had the file so this is still tweaked. So yeah, comments? 21:57, 25, 08, 2012

Define the ear pink just a tad. And yes, what she says is true. I did let her change the style. The current one as it is doesn't really let you see the rest of the image very well, and it's not the best...so it would end up getting redone anyways.

Re-uploaded ;w; 22:14, 25, 08, 2012

Yes, I am very sexuu. finally someone admits it... Define the earpink a leetle. :3 23:53, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make her head more grey, it looksbrown o3o pfffffft =P   23:58, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I changed the shading. Lol Leggy xD 22:21, 27, 08, 2012

Define the shading a bit more. this is sexy 07:42, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) - Tweaked
Fixed the shading and gave him from longer whiskers. OA was CinderXLion. 02:14, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch and tail 04:32, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make his whiskers a bit straighter, they didn't droop as much in his MC 18:41, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think they're fine - the MC is looking up. If anyone else thinks they should, though, I can change them. 21:22, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you droop them a bit more naturally? They kind of go in a straight line then drop off once they get off his face. It should be a continuous curve. 17:06, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Flametail (Ki) - Tweaked
Cloudy sent me the files so I could redo the shading and get the colors to match. Colors are all from his apprentice/MCA. Most recent OA was cloudy. Comments? 08:49, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit. 19:12, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

It's already darker than the apprentice image.... I'd rather not darken it more. :/ 20:46, August 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should define the shading/make it more visable since it is quite hard to see. (But considering my eyes.... e.e) 05:52, 28, 08, 2012

I think it's fine. The shading on this is difficult as it is with the style //and// blank size.

I think it could be defined a bit...I'm having trouble seeing. 18:44, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (W) ~ Tweaked
I tweaked the solid one since I still had the file. I <3 Cloudy ;w; Comments? 22:27, 27, 08, 2012

Brokenstar (E) - Tweaked
Just made him more bristly. OA was me 15:32, August 28, 2012 (UTC)

Driftkit (Ki) ~ Redone
Stripes were unrealistic and shading needed to make sense. Changes may not be showing yet. Comments for improvement?

Starlingwing (W) ~ Tweaked
Eww. I blurred the other stripes into oblivion, and attempted to match the apprentice. OA is Twee. Here be changes if they're not showing.

Can you define the stripes on the head a bit? I can't really see them. >.<  03:16, August 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA is Silver, and I tweaked the shading. Here are the changes.