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Redtail (A) - Declined
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Near the top of the tail looks like some miscolored pixels. Can you fix those? 19:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur stick out more like the other images, rather then curve a bit. It should basically stand on end, like he got electrocuted or something. 22:50, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not good at tail tweaking... o3o Withdrawn. 22:59, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 99.58.201.247 23:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * That was me. o.e  23:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur at the base of the tail stick out more. 23:02, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, please don't critique the charart if the user taking over hasn't uploaded yet. 05:40, 16, 06, 2012

Reuploaded I tried :P  02:35, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more....poofy, for want of a better word. Skt Spoilers... 00:12, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Widen the tail a bit. =P 00:55, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little white pixel on the tail. Kinda towards the base, on the top.... *fails at describing where* 05:24, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

That's supposed to be there, dear. Zoom in and you'll see it's the space between to pieces of fluff. 00:48, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? .-. 06:11, 22, 06, 2012

Sorry, didn't have enough time because of school... But now that I'm free, I'll upload it later tonight. 13:35, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Didn't like the old one, so I did it again. :P  01:52, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the end of his tail a bit pointier? It looks like the tip got cut off XD 04:52 Sat Jun 23

add some fluff near the base of his tail -- 15:05, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ughh Dx  04:22, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste between the tufts at the top and the ones on the top of the base of the tail seem clumped together a bit too much. 06:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Misty, you've had a week. Declining due to the one week limit.

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
Added teh stripes to the tail~Comments? 11:08, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the stripes? They make the tail look purple. Skt Spoilers... 12:51, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaed o3o 11:58, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Try and make them look like her apprentice's. 20:29, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) - Tweaked
OA was Wildfire and he needed to be shaggy. I know, it doesn't match exactly to his other images but cat's shaggy fur can look different depending on the situation, and I think it looks cool. However, I can change it if I absolutely must. 15:27, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

This looks Really good, But I suggest maybe adding some more fur around the tail, and maybe his shoulder? Just my opinion. -- 09:27, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Ivy?

Reuploaded Yup just had some offline things to take care of  01:20, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Dawn River (SC) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow and she needed her shading defined and demensionalized and her markings needed to look less like a texture (btw I actually found the exact texture in GIMP). If you want, I could add a few patches but that would require the tweaking of her queen, too, so I'd rather not. 16:02, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make her shading a bit less red? 23:33 Wed Jun 20

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular so that it looks more natural. 01:16, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine.

While this is up, it needs another color added to it. Whether it be white on the chest or something, or another shade of brown/ginger on the pelt, it needs one more to be a real tortie. A tortie is 3 colors, this is only 2. 03:32, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, If its okay I'm suggesting this, since this is up, maybe add some depth to the eyes? -- 09:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

And if possible, make the shading less..orange? Skt Spoilers... 12:16, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Someone's already said that Sky :/ I'll get it  15:00, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:17, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes and make the ear-pink a bit redder 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The furry effect needs to be smudged an blurred, and perhaps lightened. It looks like tabby stripes on the brown. 06:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't smudge it, because it's smudged to the limit; but it has been blurred. The earpink will remain untouched, since it's from the warrior. 16:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to her tail. Comments? 19:25, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 22:36, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And this is what happens when you forget to save the xcf. file -_-  01:54, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more? c: 05:54 Sat Jun 23

Reuploaded Tried :P  02:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be darkened. 18:03, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Hollowbelly (W) - Redone
Not quite as epic as Cloudy's, but I think it turned out okay. I also decided to make him a short-hair to save me some grief. The old one--(oh gosh...) Over smudged, literally no shading, and just looked like a fluffy marshmallow with tar. Comments? 01:34, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. (oh, hush. xD)

Re-uploaded I will not hush! xD 04:13, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his haunch a tad -- 04:26, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white part of his nevk..or whatever it is. Mmmm tar marshmallow Skt Spoilers... 08:20, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:26, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the bottom on this <--- side of the white patch on his chest? (Confusing. If you need a better explanation, then I can make a circle on the image of where.) 00:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:01, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The neck marking looks a little too smudged in my opinion  03:31, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Lo) ~ Redone
Before anyone starts complaining, I did get permission to redo this. It didn't match in the slightest and would have been really hard to tweak. Since it's my image I don't see a problem with redoing it. Comments?

Can you blur the smudges a little more?

Re-uploaded 20:33 Sun Jun 24

Blur the haunch shading a bit. Skt Spoilers... 22:29, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:50 Sun Jun 24

Define the shading on the head. Breeze whisker  16:52, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to the tail. OA was Maplepool with a tweak by me. Comments? 08:11 Sun Jun 24

Define the stripes a wee bit. 20:21, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:31 Sun Jun 24

Magpie (Lo) ~ Tweaked
If I need to say who the OA is, you guys are blind. <3 I wanted to make him long hair, and I re-did the shading.

I guess I'm blind then  Can you darken the hading a tiny bit on his muzzle and chest? 17:56, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, since it would make the white look darker than it needs to be. (  Me, you dork. XD   )

Orly. I knew that. Okay, can you at least lighten the shading on his haunch? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, but if others agree, I'll do it.

The shading's opacity is fine, but you might blur it a little. 68.103.240.28 16:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)


 * That was me, sorry. Breeze  whisker  16:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you possibly define the depth of the eye? Fluuuuufy Skt Spoilers... 21:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine. I didn't even touch those. XD

Hollowflight (A) - Redone
- His pale belly went too far into his stomach, he was too dark, and his stripes were too oversmudged. And oh my god I failed on this one. Especially the smudging...Comments? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! :3 Just smudge the pale belly a bit to look like the other image. ^^  02:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

His pale belly isn't smudged in his warrior...at least, not as far as I can tell. 02:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yes it is. Please smudge it. 06:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

And can you make the unshaded brown a tad lighter? (I think that's the word I'm after) Skt Spoilers... 10:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Skt, the "unshaded" brown's color code was taken from the warrior image. But if others agree, I'll lighten it. 18:00, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderstar (Lo) - Redone
...He gets green eyes because they look sexy. OA was Sweetflower with a redo by moi. Ugly patch is ugly x.x 22:39, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you remove the patch? (Unless it's going to be moved there.) 22:45, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, the whole point was so that he'd have the patch on his visible shoulder. Since this is his main image, half of his description should be part of it, eh? 22:49, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Try making the patch the same color as the old one and maybe smudge it like it was too. 22:51 Sun Jun 24

Re-uploaded. Eh. 23:08, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Loonie, this is amazing, and the patch is amazing too. Don't go doubting. Could you define the shading a little bit though? 00:58, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you dear 8D 01:12, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be my computer or my horrible eyesight, but it looks a bit purple... 01:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

No, I believe it looks fine. 04:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Looks kinda like there's a stripe bleeding through the patch. Lovely Loon~ <3 06:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

That's because their skin is different colours depending on their stripes o3o If you've ever shaved a tabby cat (not like I have... -runs-) then you can still see the tabby pattern despite the lack of fur. 16:52, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E) - Tweaked
Tweaked color to be more brown. I think this is too dark though. OA was Paleh (I think) Comments? e.e 08:05, 25, 06, 2012

I dunno about the darkness, but make the skin less fluro. Skt Spoilers... 12:42, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Scarlet and I re-did the shading ouo Comments? 09:21, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Skt Spoilers... 11:05, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderstar (L) - Redone
Same as the loner. OA was some sexy person named Oblivion. 16:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

'Tis is beautiful, Loonie. <3 Can you darken the shading on the head area? 17:33, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:54, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt.Kit) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to match alt deputy. Not sure about changes. 17:58, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? Unless it already matches the deputy. 17:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:32, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Magpie (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and I made him longhaired. Fluffy. <3

I can't see anything wrong with it...<3   I like fluffy cats     18:32, June 25, 2012 (UTC)