Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval


I was messing around in the warriors wiki when I found many declined images so I put the Kittypet blanks for approval. Comments?--Yai-Girl 17:17, 20 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Yai, these are Darkhallows' images. You need her permission to edit them, and also, o, Sandiwolf was working on them; they were just taken down due to black of work. -- Bramble My Realm 21:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Oops sorry.--Yai-Girl 15:39, 21 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

These had best be declined then until Darkhallows gives her permission to use the old blanks and until you sort it out with Sandiwolf. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:21, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Yai-girl can use them. I have attempted to revamp them to no avail. Maybe she can.-- Darkhallows Lair 17:54, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Alright then, back up for approval. Sandiwolf's were declined, and if she wants them back up, she and Yai can talk it out. There is a chances that one set can be used as rogues and the other as kittypets. (will add criticism when I have time) -- Bramble My Realm 16:00, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Kittypets are well-groomed. The fur on the lond-hairs are sticking out everywhere. I thought you weren't supposed to put cats in drying machines? -- MU MB LE 785  23:48, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Mumble, long-hairs are fluffy, know matter how "well-groomed" they are. Maybe make the hair a tad bit closer to the pelt, though. I love the collars. :)--Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 00:23, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Now, the lineart needs to be thicker, so as it goes with the other images. Instead of the tail being up, it would be better if it was curled around the paws, I think, and the ears need to be shrunk. The paws look slightly awkward too. I found this pic: click You could probably use it for reference. -- Bramble My Realm 20:53, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with everything Bramble. That pic made me laugh though. I would advise you not to make them quite that fat Yai! Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:13, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, hey, they are kittypets. lol but yeah, don't make them that fat Yai. -- Bramble My Realm 23:44, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

I have trouble making the long hairs fluffy can someone help me?--Yai-Girl 14:28, 29 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Hre's another reference: <Warrior♥ Warrior's Den 16:23, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I did the short hairs, how do they look?--Yai-Girl 19:03, 30 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Looks great, but can you please make them a bit bigger? MaYbe the size of my Loner blanks on the bottom? Besides that I love them! The reason I want them to be bigger, is beacuse it's easier to add shading, blending, and smudging, and so we can see the colors and tabby stripes/dapple even better. Hawkfire ♫  Go Aggies! 22:33, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

How do you make the blanks bigger?--Yai-Girl 14:58, 31 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Oh erm.. I don't know. Maybe ask somebody who is good at the computer? I had to redo my loner blanks to make them bigger :( Hawkfire ♫  Go Aggies! 15:17, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I have a couple of things:


 * 1) They are a little small but I'm not sure how to make them bigger (Moss might know as she did it for her prey-hunters)
 * 2) There doesn't seem to be much difference between the longhaired and shorthaired - make it clearer which have longer fur
 * 3) The heads are a little strange - they seem really... angular and the eyes are really off centre which looks odd
 * 4) The lineart on the inside of a couple of them still needs to be thickened.

Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:54, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

I thickened the lineart on the long hairs.--Yai-Girl 21:16, 1 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I have a suggestion, try to make the tail on the longhears thicker so then we can tell the difference. --Spottedwing 16:46, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

thickened tails.--Yai-Girl 18:47, 2 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Here´s a diagram, I had no problems with it, but it´s a small like Hawkfire and Sandy said.--Yai-Girl 10:59, 4 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I don't know.... the style just doesn't seem right.... -- Dawnfeather talk! 09:52, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

What do you mean Dawn?--Yai-Girl 11:39, 6 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

They look rather cartoon-ish to me, and I honestly don't think they work very well. Please don't get me wrong - there is no offense intended, to either you, Yai-Girl, or Shady. -- Dawnfeather talk! 11:52, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

I can make them bigger, Yai, if that's alright with you. What Spottedwing meant when she said thicker tails wasn't the tail lineart, it was the size of the tail. As for the cartoonishness, I think their heads are the main problem. Their ears are at an awkward angle, and a bit big, and I think their heads just seem a bit wonky. But other than that, they seem like our other blanks. If you think about it Dawn, they're all cartoons... at least in the fact that they're drawn. -- Bramble My Realm 03:11, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Here are my horribble ears.--Yai-Girl 11:25, 12 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

The angle on the tails of the short hairs are bothering me. Make them more curved. I had the same problem. Also, I can barley tell the females from the males. Make the males coalars more maleish ( If that makes since ).Minnowclaw 11:48, 12 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The right ear (Our right), looks smaller than the left ear, on the long-haired cats. Maybe make the right ears a bit bigger. Also, I agree with Minnowclaw; the males are hard to distinguish from the females. I think if you made the females' eyes a bit more "feminine", they'd look better. ;) -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 16:50, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

I made the ears bigger and fixed the tails.--Yai-Girl 09:40, 13 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

You're skipping over the make the females more feminine and the males more masculine. I think thickening their eye lineart, and making the female eyes look more feminine, and making a collar differenece would be better. -- Bramble My Realm 14:31, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

I made the females eyes more feminine, made the males lissence rounder rather than a heart shape like on the females, and I made the long hairs tails thiner.--Yai-Girl 15:36, 13 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl



I made another Rusty... these blanks do work. They just need to be made bigger. Also I like how the tail comes from behind the body on the longhairs more than the other two. Make the shorthairs tails curve round exactly like longhairs. -- Bramble My Realm 19:59, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

I don't think they look right... they're very square on the shoulders and legs and the fur is all... tufty which makes them look like ungroomed kits. I think the fur for both the long and shorthaired needs to be sleeker as if it is well-groomed and the angle of the head is strange. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 10:22, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

It's not exactly looking at you; the head was made at a 3/4 angle. -- Blackclaw09 20:36, 14 August 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree with you, Sandy. I expressed that awhile ago, with the fur... But, yeah. Do as the loyal deputy said. -- MU MB LE 785 MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 18:29, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

I twicked the long-hairs I will do the short-hairs later.--Yai-Girl 23:09, 15 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Where the leg is connected to the body there is an awkward looking pixel.-- Darkhallows Lair 17:25, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Here?--Yai-Girl 12:59, 19 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

They're so cute! Except, I think the long-hairs' tails need to be fluffier.  Jane Volturi Sparrowsong 17:08, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree. Also, make the long-haired cats' back legs, a little fluffier. Very cute, Yai-Girl! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:25, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - On the longhaired's, their paws are bigger than the shorthaired's - make them the size of the shorthaired's. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire  01:20, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Also, the ears need to be at least slightly more rounded. -- Dawnfeather talk! 09:58, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Also -
 * As I said before, the ears.
 * The mark showing the top of the head extends too far on that side in my opinioin. Maybe just shorten it a few pixels.
 * I know this bit was hard, but the she-cat's love-heart tag collar thingy's shape needs to be refined a bit.
 * The one next to the question mark - I don't know maybe just tweak that little area with the hindleg a bit - it didn't look quite right to me but it will be fine if you don't edit it.
 * The thing that bugs me most about these images - how at that point there with the arrows and diagrams coming from it the line doesn't change from vertical-pixel-coloumn-thingy to the other gradually, but *wup!* it's here, and then *wup!* it's there. Just add in a few other pixels to make it less, sudden. I'm sorry if I seem harsh - I just want to help you get this image approved so tweak week can come.! -- Dawnfeather talk! 10:15, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Here are he short hairs, I will try to edit the long hairs but it's pretty hard.--Yai-Girl 12:39, 24 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Here are the worst long hairs on the planet.--Yai-Girl 15:46, 24 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I'm not sure what happened, but I made this back into an editable topic. The only thing still bugging me a bit would be the female tags on the collars. Other than that, these are really nice, I think. (:-- Quiet !... 18:07, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I think the long hairs look pretty good. The female tags on the collars look different between the long hairs and the short hairs, the one on the short hair looks more like a heart, while the one on the long hair looks more square-ish at the top. (it is supposed to be a heart, right?) Otherwise, everything looks great! Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 20:54, 24 August 2009 (UTC)



(M) - Here's a diagram for the collars. :) Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire  23:16, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Here are the collars.--Yai-Girl 12:35, 25 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

They look great! -- Rain whisker 09 14:37, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Why didn't someone just ask if they could touch up the Kittypet blanks Sandiwolf made that were close to approval? I liked the position on those... these are really good too, although they need to be enlarged... I like the fur on the longhairs though. --♫ insaneular ♫ 15:27, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

These havent been worked on in a week i know i cant put a decline notice up but it hasnt been worked on. --Stonestar 21:20, September 1, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

But no ones commented soo... Anyway, one ear is longer than the other (on the longhairs) and the tag is a little too big-- Darkhallows Lair 02:47, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

The reason the ear is longer is cause the head is facing to one side. If it was both the same size, it would look like one ear shrunk. But I agree, the tags are a bit big. -- Rain whisker 09 15:28, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, the other ear should be longer. I didn't see the image. If you don't want to re-draw the ears, you could put the longer ear on the right side and the shorter ear on the left side. -- Rain whisker 09 15:31, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - If the head is at a 3/4th angle, it would need to look like this:

Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:56, September 2, 2009 (UTC)


 * I've just worked out exactly what it is about these that I'm not sure about. They look very pixelated, sqaure. like those pixels you can find online... they don't exactly look like real cats. I think you need to make the bigger, round the shoulders off a little and generally make all he lineart a bit smoother to make them look more realistic and in line with our other approved blanks. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 08:32, September 5, 2009 (UTC)

I will try to make them look like real cats later. Comments?--Yai-Girl 11:38, September 5, 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

I wanted to have a try at them so I tried one: I think it looks fine, but yes, make them more cat-like*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:48, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I can make them bigger, if you want. And should the nose be black or pink? -- Rain whisker 09 15:20, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with everything said above. Also, keep the noses white. We can color them in pink (As we do with the queen blanks). If anyone disagrees with me, then I think the noses should be black, rather than pink. But, very nice, Yai-Girl! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 17:43, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Feathertail- Redone


Hey Hawkfire here! I just got finished with her. (really sorry Shimmer!) I fixed her ear pink and her eye, and lightened the shading on her tail. I can't get the old pic of the oringinal Feathertail! I accidently uploaded it with the same name. Somebody help please. Hawkey  Ready for action 13:34, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

The ear needs to be blended more.--Stonestar 13:35, 30 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Something looks funky about the way it was blended- I mean from the original, not what you did. I'm not sure if it's because the lines got smudged in or they just had a weird shading style, but I think you should go over the shading a bit and then reblur it.Same for the tabby markings, they look a bit strange, so maybe if you went over them in the same color then blurred them again that would work. --♫ insaneular ♫ 15:09, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Very good, but I believe Feathertail should be long-haired. It's because a. she's RiverClan; they generally have thick fur and b. she was said to have a feathery/fluffy tail.  Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 17:57, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Insanular, umm...wow I am not sure I can do all of that. The tabby stripes look amazing and the shading is great to me. I will change her to a long hair, even tho I never imagined her that way. Silverstream is short hair, and she's from RiverClan. If I did have to change her to long-hair, I would have to redo the whole image. Do you really want me to do that? Hawkey  Ready for action 19:49, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

I could change her to a long-hair if you want, with oly minor edits..-- Darkhallows Lair 20:22, 30 August 2009 (UTC)


 * You wont exactly have to redo her all the way. The technique I use is past the image in paint and color the lineart white. Then take the lineart of the long hair and past it over, with white being transparent and you just have to remove the eye out of the other image. The only problem is you will have to add more coloring to the tail area and the chest.-- Shim-Shim New Gladiator! 20:27, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Shady that would be very kind of you! Now all I have to do is mess with the ear pink. :)Thanks so much! Hawkey  Ready for action 21:46, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

You may need to work on the tail but here.-- Darkhallows Lair 07:04, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks so much! She's gorgeous! I will fix the shading on the tail and blend the ear pink, then she should be good to go!! Hawkey  Ready for action 23:23, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (MC) - for approval


Well its 11:52 where I am, so its only 8 minutes until we can put up images again, So I thougt: what the heck, tweak weak will be over by the time they see this anyway.

The image: I followed what it said on her description. Although I don't remeber the tabby striped tail... Mossflight 06:59, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I think you should make the tail look more like it has patches, not stripes. Also, blend the patches more.Minnowclaw 13:40, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

umm, i kinda already saved spottedleaf so i could make her sorry.Shim-Shim ★ 15:37, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. If Shimmersong did reserve her then please withdraw this. Can people please start taking note of the reservations? This is the second image I've had to say this to today. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:04, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Shimmersong, I didn't see your reservation. I will just simply turn it into... Redtail. Just have to lose the herbs and change the eye.<span style="color: Black; font-family:Comic Sans MS; background:Blue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black;">Mossflight 15:56, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

And blend the patches more. And you will need some black patches for a tortie, and the Redtail image has more redish ginger patches than this. Sorry that I sound harsh; I'm just trying to help. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 10:08, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ok I will not change this one. I tried looking for a tortoiseshell medicine cat and I found her (Dapplepelt). <span style="color: Black; font-family:Comic Sans MS; background:Blue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black;">Mossflight 15:56, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, you just need to take away the things that are specific to Spottedleaf now, such as the darker eye fur and stripd tail. I'd add more patches and make them more irregularly shaped, blend them together more too. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:14, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Heres the new one. <span style="color: Black; font-family:Comic Sans MS; background:Blue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Black;">Mossflight 22:38, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

It's great, but I think you should take away the white muzzle, paws, and chest as well because she was never said to have those. And I think that Dapplepelt should be a little more...dappled, if you know what I mean. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 22:43, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Pine for approval
OK my Fist try so tell me what is not right Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:32, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Hi Brambleclaw, that's really good for a first try! Lol, you just barely beat me to putting up the first rogue for approval ever, since the blanks are fairly new, but... XD I can only see a few things you need to change: First, you need shading. It looks like you might have a little, but you need much more. Just decide where your light source is and then figure out where the highlights and shadows would fall. Next, this isn't necessary, but you might want to make the fur slightly off white, because in reality cats aren't perfectly white. Then, the spots. I really like your arrangement, but make a few of them different sizes so it looks a bit more natural. Then, just take the Blue tool (almost every image program has one) and go over all of the color- but don't blur the lines! I know this can sound like a lot to take in, but trust me, that is really good for a first try. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 12:24, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the picture stretched? Also, it looks as if you put shading but in a cream color. You don't want that color for shading. What I recommend for shading is making the cat slightly less white and then taken the burn tool and going over it a lot of times until you can see and differentiate what is shading and what is pelt, but don't forget to blend.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 13:46, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

It does look stretched. I'm going with Swallowtip on this one. Try making the cat fur a little more grayer, and use the burn tool all over the belly and the chest. -- Rain whisker 09 15:13, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

OK I will do all of it soon :/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:31, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The whole thing is a little fuzzy.-- Darkhallows My den 04:43, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Well it's a try :/ sould the old file be got rid of? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 09:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Didn't you upload the file with the same name? -- Rain whisker 09 12:30, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

nope :/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 14:36, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

You should always upload over the old file. The corrcet file name for this image would be something like: Pine.rogue.png Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:46, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

OK I will, if I upload it more Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:19, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

OK, this file is now called "File:Pine.rogue.png, per suggestion, if I upload any more they will be uploaded over the top of this file. As to what I've done: It shouldn't be streached, if it is then it's a problem with the blank template. Shouldn't be fuzzy (and if it is... well, cats are fuzzy :)). I've added some shading in. Redone the spots and ears. Thanks Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:29, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

He's nearly there you just need to add a touch of shading on the tail and blend the ear pink into the pelt a bit more. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:17, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

OK will do so soon Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:05, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I've done it now. I also had to redo the spots, because I deleted them by accident Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:41, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Very nice! Just color in his eye and give him a pupil and a highlight. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:49, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Ahh yes I was going say I can't find what eye color he has, and what is the pupil? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:14, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

oops I know what the pupil is :) I will do the highlight soon, Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 14:00, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Frisk - For approval
I wanted to try a kit, because they're quick and I hadn't done one before. I had trouble making his flecks look good, and I wasn't sure how much to shade (because I'm on a computer with a bad display, and whenever I go back to my good one the shading looks more dramatic). How does it look? <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 17:34, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - He's so cute! Your shading doesn't look to dark to me. Just blur it a bit more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded and tried to blur more, although I was on pixlr which is hard to blur with, so it might not be visibly better. Tomorrow night I'll be on my computer with GIMP so I can blur more accurately and powerfully, if it's needed. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:36, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Aw he's cute. Did you make him on Pixlr? You must be very talented as I can't do it for my life xD. The blurtool is so weak..-- Darkhallows My den 04:45, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, I used pixlr, although the weak blur and the fact that whenever you reopen an image the layers are merged are the reasons I don't like it... <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 19:08, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I love this. It may be my computer, but it looks like there are some lightish-gray clouds near him. If I'm wrong, I'd be glad to start the 24 hours. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 22:47, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - It's not your computer; I see the clouds too. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:53, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I notice them as well. Icethroat21 Enter at risk 21:26, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded and removed the clouds. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:50, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:22, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Flora - approval
well... my first pic, o god please don't hurt me!<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 13:43, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

She's cute Swallowtip! I'm like half asleep and the only thing I see is the eye doesn't have a pupil.-- Darkhallows Lair 14:32, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added a black spot to make the pupil more noticeable, better?<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 14:41, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is the nose supposed to be pink? I thought we made them black (except for the queen blanks). -- Rain whisker 09 15:15, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - This is great for your first image! Blackclaw, the noses should be pink if on the blanks they are not colored in black. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:20, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The brown under the ear cuts off in an abrupt line, can you smooth this out a little? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:25, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know it doesn't look much different, but I tried to get it there with the blur tool and it didn't work so I smudged it.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 19:49, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

It looks great! Very nice job. -- Rain whisker 09 20:10, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Try taking the brown patch and spreading it over that little patch on white on the ear pink to make it look more natural. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:56, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened ear pink and extend the brown patch.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 02:21, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

She's very nice, but some of the patches are too circular for their own good. Mabe make them a bit more randomly shaped, especially that one on the belly? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 10:12, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the patches and made them more random.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:30, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just give the eye and nose some color and she should be ready. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:31, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

That was dumb of me to forget that. Oh well, Reuploaded.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 00:03, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Also, her back looks a bit blank. Maybe you should add one more patch there. DOn't forget to blend! =D --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 12:18, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

And all of your lovely shading has gone! You'll have to redo that. Just do hese two things and she should be ready.

ReuploadedI wouldn't call it lovely, but thanks, who ever you are. Made a patch on the back and added shading.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 00:22, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just blur your shading more and it should be ready. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:21, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Buzzardtail- For approval
Well, this is my first charart... <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 15:37, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good for your first charart, I only see a few problems:


 * Add shading and blend it, making it look real
 * Blend the ear pink and make it darker, it looks fluro
 * Add highlights on the pelt

Hawkey  Ready for action 17:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I can't see any shading, add some and use the blur tool to make his pelt seem for 3-D. And blur the ear, make it not as bright. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;aqua; background:silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Peacesong Click Here To Go To........My Talk Page 18:14, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

They're right. Make the ear pink a triangle shape in the centre of the ear and blend a little. Despite what Hawke said above, don't add highlights until you've got the shading sussed as it'll make it more difficult and the image may not even need them. Get the shading and ear sorted and then see about highlights. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:23, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

OK. I'll fix that stuff. <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 20:00, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can someone give me some tips on shading? I always get it too dark, and I don't know where to put it. <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 20:11, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not really good at shading, either, but what I did was get the smudge tool, set the brush size to about 3 or 5, and then just smudge from the outline. (I did this in Pixlr.) And then I blurred it together by clicking on the blur tool and setting it to about 3-5. As I said, I'm not really sure about the best shading tips, but maybe that can help a little bit. Also, I noticed a couple of other things.

Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 00:11, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
 * The right ear is just a little bit darker than the rest of his fur.
 * Try blending the ear pink some more. The ear pink it really standing out right now.

Thanks! I'll go fix that stuff. <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 00:53, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay. Anything else? <font color="Cyan" style="background:MistyRose">Morningleaf <font color="Orange" style="background:PeachPuff">Fox Cub <font color="Yellow" style="background:LightBlue">Wolf Pup 00:21, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

I think the shading is on the back, the hind leg, and where the tail connects to his body. And the back ear should be darker as well. -- Rain whisker 09 18:16, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Stripes- For Approval
Heres my first rogue! It took forever to do the stripes! Comments? Hawkey  Ready for action 17:17, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Hawkfire, this is beautiful! The only things I can see are: 1. the ear pink is too light and needs to be blurred 2. the shading needs to be darker and look more like shading; right now it just looks like blobs of darker color. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 17:34, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M)- I love the pattern of your stripes! Just do what Sparrowsong suggested and it should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:14, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Darkened shading and ear pink Hawkey  Ready for action 00:31, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

The shading should be blurred into the pelt a little more.-- Darkhallows My den 04:48, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Rosetail - For Approval


Here's my first elder. Is she good? Her description was kinda confusing - I thought that 'pinkish-orange' would be a color similar to Brackenfoot's, but I'm not quite sure. Anyways, comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 17:28, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like it. But in Bluestar's Prophecy it was revealed Rosetail was a tabby. Could you add some stripes? Hawkey  Ready for action 18:00, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, and add more shading too :) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I took this off of the thumbnail becuase it was messing up the layout of the section below this slightly... I hope you don't mind. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:26, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Moss. And I added stripes and more shading. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 18:34, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I thought she was a brown tabby with a red tail, like Poppydawn?-- Darkhallows My den 04:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

As far as I know, it never said that. I have not read BSP, though, so I can't really be sure... <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 06:13, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I don't have my copy on me but it says something like: "...named her Rosekit because of the red spots on her tail." and "the tabby warrior"/"the red-tailed warrior." and her mother was Poppydawn. Heh, I actually paid close attention to her part because I quite enjoyed her character.-- Darkhallows My den 10:17, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...I don't think I can change her to brown without completely redoing the image. Perhaps I could add some darker ginger spots on her tail? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 23:07, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

It also mentions her having a "pinky-orange" tail.. I wish they had kept her description strait. "The red-tailed warrior changed the subject..." "Snowkit named her for the pinky-orange color of her tail" "The young tabby..." I think she should be OK the ways she is.-- Darkhallows My den 07:41, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Ok...is there anything else I can do to improve her? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 16:51, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

No, this is lovely. Comments before approval? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Black">G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 22:44, September 9, 2009 (UTC)


 * Blushes* Thanks, GB! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 02:41, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I thought that it was just her tail that was orange-pinkish, and that the rest of her fur was tortoiseshell or white or something, like Sweetpaw and Thistleclaw. But I think this pic will be fine. It looks great! Icethroat21 Enter at risk 21:29, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Mosspelt - For Approval


(M) - Mosspelt seems like a great cat. She was nice to Graystripe while he was in RiverClan, she was mother of our famous Willowshine, and nursed Stormfur and Feathertail. Plus she shares my name!

(insert lightning flash here) SHE...HAS FUR! xP This is my first tortishell up for approval, and I tried to made it as relistic as possible. Comments? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:10, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. I can't see it. -- Rain whisker 09 20:07, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I wouldn't say to lighten the ear pink, because darker cats are supposed to have that color. What I would say is to make it a bit more solid so its easier to see. -- Quiet !... 20:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Changed the ear pink, look any better? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:51, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The black seems so flat... add darker and lighter shades.-- Darkhallows Lair 01:08, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Adding different shades of black would make it look brindled and non-tortishell...I tried adding some small flecks of colors in the black, and I lightened the neck shading becuase it seemed to dark. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:13, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Anything else I need to change? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:51, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

The only thing that bugs me is that the shading seems more darkly saturated and sort of blotchy on the pelt than showing where shadow is. Make the shading more natural, than she'll be good. -- Bramble My Realm 02:31, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

The definition of saturation is soaked, impregnated, or imbued thoroughly; charged thoroughly or completely; of maximum chroma or purity; of the highest intensity of hue; free from a mixture of white. Can you tell I got that straight from Dictionary.com? =) Anyways, basically just make it less... wet-looking. There should be a sponge tool somewhere; set it to desaturate and go over the shading. -- Bramble My Realm 20:58, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks Brable! I knew what saturation is, but I wasn't sure how it's used in shading. So I desaturated the shading, and discovered a way to use the dodge tool as a lighten shading tool bascally, so I lightened the shading in a few places. Then I blurred the shading a bit more. Better? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:47, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfur - For Approval


Here's Brackenfur, my second-favorite warrior (Tawnypelt is my #1 fave). Hopefully it's better than my first Brackenfur, which looked like a possessed chihuahua. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 18:45, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I broke out laughing when I read your comment about the possessed chihuahua. This is good! Just make it so your ear pink isn't touching the bottem of the ear, and see if you can blend it more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:49, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks very nice! Just blend the shading a little more! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;aqua; background:silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Peacesong Click Here To Go To........My Talk Page 18:51, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the shading and the ear pink. Is it better now? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 18:57, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The transition between shading and regular pelt is still too hard. Blend until you can't see a line separating them. The two tabby stripes coming out from his chest, separate them a little bit, it looks likes one big awkward stripe. -- Bramble My Realm 21:26, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 01:06, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

...Any comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 20:46, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

If you could get rid of the mark just below his eye, it would be better. It looks crowded in that area. Also, on the back, there is a strip of light just after the shading and against the lineart. -- Bramble My Realm 21:23, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I've fixed the eye mark...I don't know what you mean by 'strip of light.' Would you mind circling it or something? Thanks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 02:41, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

You need to extend the shading right up to the lineart on the back - basically, you've missed a spot right next to the lineart. I don't think a diagram is realy necessary to explain this. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:40, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I think I've fixed it now. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 17:52, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Now you've blurred the lineart there a bit Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:30, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Un-blurred the lineart. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 22:27, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Bluestar(A) - For Approval


Introducing... BLUEPAW! Anything that needs to be fixed? -- Quiet !... 20:16, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful! All I can see, is that maybe you should blend the ear a bit more. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and Bluestar has a silver-tinged muzzle, and silver-tipped tail. ;) -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:23, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I didn't add the silver muzzle and tail tips because (from what I know) those came with age. unless someone has proof of otherwise, I'm not going to add it. :\ -- Quiet !... 20:35, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I always thought that too. I think it's fine as it is. One thing; the shading seems to go right across the face. Make it more curved downward, so it's as if she has a jaw shadow. -- Bramble My Realm 21:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow... O.O She needs a pupil in her eye though. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:52, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Updated. Anything else? -- Quiet !... 01:12, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

The neck shading needs to be blended more.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:33, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Hazelstar- For Approval
I'm on a leader spree! Three leaders in a row. XD Lol. Anyway, here's Hazelstar. Originally, he was Redstar, but, then I figured out Redstar was already reserved, so, I lightened him up, and turned him into Hazelstar! Comments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:44, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Very good. Just blur the shading transition some more. -- Bramble My Realm 21:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Err... is there supposed to be color under his hind leg? -- Rain whisker 09 23:36, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blend all of the shading a whole lot.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 18:00, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, blend the edges a little more and make the ear pink slightly smaller so it doesn't fill the whole ear. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:38, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Sunspots - For Approval


I'm beginning to like ginger-and-white cats for some reason... I don't know. Anyways, here's Sunspots, a queen from CoOTC. She has like one line, so I thought I'd do her to make up for it. Constructments? -- Bramble My Realm 21:58, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful Bramble! I see nothing wrong. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:00, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ginger is slightly bright. Try darkening it a tad? Hawkey  Ready for action 00:31, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I would add another ginger patch on her chest. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 01:08, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Sparrowsong. Heh, I keep meaning to try a ginger or ginger and white cat, surprisingly I haven't done one before... -- Darkhallows Lair 04:21, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a little? I can barely see it. Other than that, this looks great! Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:37, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. :) Will do, tomorrow before/after school. -- Bramble My Realm 03:24, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Tried to darken shading, added a patch on her chest, and attempted to make the patches a touch darker. -- Bramble My Realm 21:18, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before aproval? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:22, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Spottedleaf-For Approval
This is Spottedleaf!!Please tell me how to make her better!!<span style="color:Orange;background:Blue;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Shim-Shim ★ 22:05, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I like this alot! :D Just darken the shading on the bottem of the herbs a bit more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:14, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The one thing that's realy bothering me is her tail - it looks striped. :\ -- Quiet !...

She looks to... blurry. -- Darkhallows Lair 04:19, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Her tail is suppose to be a brown TABBY tail.<span style="color:Orange;background:Blue;font-family:Papyrus;border:1px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;">Shim-Shim ★ 17:20, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darn it, her description is WAY too long for me to remember correctly. >w< -- Quiet !... 19:51, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Loner Blanks - For Approval


(M) - I did more of a Melonlemon-style with these blanks and I'm pretty happy with the way they turned out. I also made an example (The shading might be in the wrong places though.)



Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:13, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

These are great! Give the muzzle a bit more of a stop and the ears look weird... but I really like them. - Darkhallows Lair 22:45, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

this looks really good Mosswhisker! but since they're loners ,wouldn't the fur be a bit scruffier?--<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Turquoise; background:Black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Turquoise;"> ☆Darkkeh☆ uh...hi 22:46, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

For some reason the head looks a bit small to me... but they look great otherwise! -- Rain whisker 09 23:35, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, Mosswhisker... you're amazing at making blanks! There are only a few things that I can say about these. Firstly, the neck looks a bit too thin, almost pinched, maybe you could make it a bit thicker. Also, I think there should be a bit more definition between the neck and the foreleg, it looks a little too smooth to me. These are incredible, though! <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:39, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks guys! I'll change them tomorrow, after school. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 00:03, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Okay! I changed the muzzles so they have a stop, fixed the foreleg, and fixed the neck. (All I did was shorten it, and I think that helped.) I also didn't know what was wrong with the ears, but I did make them less pointy. I didn't change the fur because it's pretty scruffy as it is, and Loners wouldn't be a scruffy as Roughes. I didn't change the head size becuase when I inceased in by a mear 2 pixles, it looked waaay to big. I also got rid of the gray lines on the longhaireds. What else do I need to fix? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:35, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

The ears look a little small. Can you make them a bit bigger? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:19, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Lilystar-For approval
I've had her sitting in my hard-drive forever, like over a month. I think she's pretty, but that's not for me to decide :D.-- Darkhallows Lair 23:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - WOW. Uber pretty! Just darken the ear pink a shade, its so light now that I can barely see it. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 00:02, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Just darken the ear pink and she should be good to go. Hawkey  Ready for action 00:32, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darkened-- Darkhallows Lair 01:03, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I'm with Hawky. Comments before approval? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Orange; background:LightBlue; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orange;"> Dawnfeather talk! 10:25, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think that you need to blend the shading a lot more.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:58, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I like the shading... The nose needs to be pink though, not grey. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I think the shading's fine, but add a highlight in the eye too. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:21, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is blended to 100%, and gray cats have gray noses (gray cat) I will change the eye though.--[[User:Darkhallows| Darkhallows] My den 23:28, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the eye and made the nose pinker (but still gray)-- Darkhallows My den 07:52, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Her left eye and our right, it looks like you made the highlight go over the eye lineart; fix that. Then she'll be good. -- Bramble My Realm 11:42, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Ratscar - For Approval
Alright, this is my first charart! Well, what do you think? I feel like I need a lot more shading, and I think that the scar looks a little weird... Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 20:15, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, the scar looks strange, you should blend it a little bit, add some more shading and then blur it, otherwise......it looks okay. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;aqua; background:silver; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Peacesong Click Here To Go To........My Talk Page 22:43, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - This is good for your first image! For the scar, lighten it so it's more pink, blur it thoroghly, and try putting it horazontally across the back. Lighten the ear pink and blur it too. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:20, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Okay, what else can I do to improve? I feel like I went crazy on the shading, and that the scar is too big, but I'm not really sure how to make it any smaller without destroying some of the shading, or the scar itself. Can anybody give me any suggestions, and tell me what you think? Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 00:59, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Alright, since no one has said anything yet, can I just ask about the shading? I think I got it too dark, and I'm thinking if I could have gone without the highlights or not... Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 21:07, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Whoops, sorry. Lighten the shading, as it is pretty dark right now, and try making the scar a little shorter, just past the edge of your image. Also, make the eye more like the other approved warrior's eyes. Then we'll work on shading. ;) Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire  22:46, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I made the scar shorter, and I tried to make the shading a little less dark by blurring it a little more, but I think it looks messier now. And I tried doing what you said about the eye, too. Anything else besides needing to make the shading even brighter? I'm not sure how to make it any brighter than it is now. Any suggestions? Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 23:40, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - To lighten the shading you run the dodge tool - a black stick with a black ball - over your shading. I can fix it if you want me too. And the ear pink is much to bright; use a color simalar to other brown cats. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:45, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed the ear pink, or at least tried to, and I tried to make the shading brighter. Do I need to make it even brighter? Icethroat21 Enter at risk 23:43, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Select the dodge tol, and in the box and the top set it to shadows. Then bring the stength down to 7. That should lighten the shading. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:18, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Redstar- for approval

 * So here's Redstar. I made him before Tweak week, but didnt have a chance to put him up. He's my first leader, so, comments? Criticism? <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 00:35, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice. Only I can't see the shading, darken it a little. The ear pink is also bright and fluro, try making it a more natural color. Hawkey  Ready for action 02:23, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I can see some white spots on his back, and could you make his pelt more like a ginger color. Its very nice though. :). --Stonestar 11:30, September 9, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

I think you need to make the highlights bigger and blend it all more :) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:01, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded and increased shading, and changed ear pink. It was hard to get the shading to be dark, but also blurred... does it look okay? <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:46, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Blur highlights and shading alot more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:16, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Oakheart - for approval
Well, here's Oakheart! I've had him on my computer, like, forever, and I'm finally getting to put him up! ^.^ He's my first tabby, so the stripes probably need some fixing... comments/criticism?--<span style="color:Orchid;background:Wheat;font-family:AvantGarde Md BT;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orchid;"> Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 12:45, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

This is really great for your first tabby! I don't see anything wrong with the stripes, personally. You could make the shading a bit darker, though. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 16:51, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I always pictured him a bit more gingerish, but it never specifies it in a book :P The tabby markings are great! Just add a bit more shading and blur everything (including the tabby markings, but only a little bit so they look natural. Don't smudge them into blurry messes) <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 19:48, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

There is not much wrong with the image, but where does it say he is tabby? His official description is a bracken-colored tom, and I never remember him being mentioned as a tabby. Book reference? -- Bramble My Realm 21:14, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

In the Into the Wild allegiances, he is a reddish brown tom. In the prologue of Forest of Secrets, he is mentioned as a bracken-colored tom. I didn't read anything before about Oakheart being a tabby. -- Rain whisker 09 13:46, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I've never seen him as a tabby either... I also think he needs to be slightly more red. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:59, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reddish-brown is basically the same as ginger, and virtually all ginger cats are tabbies. I think the tabby markings should stay. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:IceBlue; background:pink; border:1px solid; ; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:aqua;"> Sparrowsong Madly Blooming Princess 19:08, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Russetfur wasn't made as a tabby. If his definition is bracken-colored tom, then there should be no tabby stripes. We'll keep realism out of the picture for now. The people who look here don't care overly much. :) -- Bramble My Realm 21:02, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Got rid of the stripes and made the color more reddish.--<span style="color:Orchid;background:Wheat;font-family:AvantGarde Md BT;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Orchid;"> Echomist <font color="Goldenrod">Hear the Echo... 22:30, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:15, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Flamepaw - for approval
Now that my medicine cat apprentice blanks are approved, I want to use them. Here's Flamepaw!Minnowclaw 00:17, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

He looks great but could you change the pelt color to more of a ginger color it looks like a reddish pink to me.--Stonestar 00:31, September 10, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

I agree with Stonestar, it looks more of a reddish pink color. Otherwise, it looks great! Icethroat21 Hi, how's the prey running? 00:34, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Love it, as they said above, it looks pinkish-orange color. Other thing, the ear pink is too bright. Try darkening it a little. The ear pink also looks round, make it triangular. Hawkey  Ready for action 02:26, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great :) You need to match the colour to if that helps.  Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:46, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Foxheart(W)- For Approval
, Dunno what to think on this one. -- Darkhallows My den 05:52, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Make some tabby stripes longer and some shorter, and give them different thinkness. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:51, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I love this! But the ear pink needs to be larger and more triangular. The shading also needs to be darkened. Hawkey  Ready for action 01:16, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Changed. -- Darkhallows My den 06:09, September 11, 2009 (UTC)