Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 58

Dawnpelt Alt Apprentice - Approved
Can someone redo the highlights for me? It's not fixing. Also, I'm probably not going to work on this until Saturday...unless I'm lucky any old time. -- Quailflight 11:07, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Hurrah for pixlr's color replacement tool! -- Quailflight 11:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some. The ones on her haunch and shoulder look white. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:42, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

That's the problem. I need some help with them. So I would like someone to correct them for me. Quailflight 23:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I was able to fix the bottom highlight, but could someone give me help with the top? -- Quailflight 10:45, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Help and comments? I'm the world's most horrible charart person. I don't know what happened with my style. Quailflight 08:14, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Comments? -- Quailflight 09:28, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading some more. If you can't do it I'll be happy to help. Also, make the earpink brighter but not too bright. I can't see it. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  16:31, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'll do the earpink, but the highlights are killing me. Quailflight 11:07, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I think Birchy's helping me with the highlights. Quailflight 08:56, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Kay I'll blur the highlights for you Quail. Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  16:44, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Birchy. Quailflight 21:12, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Icefall Icy Winds 22:29, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Birchy's supposed to do it, because I'm using pixlr, but hasn't done it yet. I'll have to really work on it if Birchy can't do it. Quailflight 07:46, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Quail, you're just going to have to do it yourself because you put this image up and it's not fair to sit waiting on Birchy to do it. Just keep at it and you'll get it right eventually. Pixlr has a perfectly adequate blur tool if you know how to use it. You just need to practice. -- Sandy star 12:42, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

>since Quail requested this to be declined, may I take over? Icefall Icy Winds 20:11, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

um hmm. Go ahead. -- Sandy star 18:04, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I re-did the shading and highlights. Icefall★ Talk 16:35, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add/Darken the earpink. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  16:37, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink. Icefall★ Talk 16:42, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

It might just be me but I still can't see the earpink. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  20:02, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:  Icefall★ Talk 23:13, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the legs farthest from us, and thicken the shading on her chin Night  Fall 04:25, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done. Icefall★ Talk 14:08, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great to me. Comments before approval?

Darken the ear pink a bit more and make sure it doesn't touch the line art--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:24, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icefall★ Talk 02:01, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? Night Fall 06:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 21:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - Approved
There is one discussion, Cinderpelt123, so this should be under the limit. Comments/Criticism for Goldenflower? -- 雨 晶須  20:50, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit. Blur the chest shading. Darken haunch shading-- Night s h i n e   R  20:53, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah blur it a bit more as Nightshine said as the dark ginger looks a bit splotchy on my computer screen:)Wildear~101:) 13:14, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks kinda off with the dark splotches everywhere. Highlight the tail and muzzle more. FrostCloud 15:34, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't she get a cut ear in battle training from Bluepaw? Scarletwind 21:30, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like she has darker patches of fur on her pelt. Other then that its great :) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 23:15, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Put a nick in the ear closest to us. Quailflight 08:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The darker patches of fur are supposed to be shading, and I can't blur them any more. And yes, I'll add the nick in her ear. 雨 晶須  01:51, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

She looks slightly lumpy. Try blurring those dark parts more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I'll do that in a sec. 雨  晶須  22:04, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is it better? I blurred the dark parts, but it didn't work so well so I lightened them. 雨 晶須  23:40, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. Just blur the haunch shading a tiny bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  23:42, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Anything else to work on? 雨 晶須  00:04, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:45, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

That is where the light source is coming from, so there should be no back shading. Darken the shading on the neck a tad then this should be ready-- Night s h i n e   R  05:54, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hm, okay, then lighten the ear pink a little. I can't really see it. Icefall Icy Winds 12:03, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks fine on my screen-- Night s h i n e   R  23:26, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Ice, it looks a bit dark to me. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! Here comesSUMMER!   23:30, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Night, it looks fine on my computer. If I lighten it any more you probably won't be able to see it. 雨 晶須  23:06, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I darkened the shading on her neck. 雨 晶須  23:12, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is to maybe blur the shading a bit, it looks a bit bumpy. And thicken the line art on her torn ear Night  Fall 00:40, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Icefall★ Talk 13:45, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I've blurred the shading as much as I can. Pixlr's blurring tool isn't that great :( And I thickened the torn ear lineart. 雨晶須  五六 七 17:44, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great, Blackclaw. Comments before approval? --Bram ble 19:39, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 21:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Rabbittail (W) Approved
Ah, finally xD Okay, the first image is how he's described in Battles of the Clans. The second image is how he's drawn in Battles of the Clans. I wasn't sure which description to go with, so I thought I'd put them both up and see what you guys think Night  Fall 21:32, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one best, but they're both nice. Whichever one you choose the tail should be shortened. His description says stunted white tail. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:36, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think it should be just like his description says. Pale gray with a stunted tail. It would probably look like Berrynose's tail-- Night s h i n e   R  21:42, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

The second one looks good, but both of them are lovely. For the second one, Blur the white patches, and for the first one, blur the ear pink and highlights. Icefall Icy Winds 21:49, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Yeah, Nightshine was right about the tail :) "Stunted -Slowed or stopped abnormally in growth or development" So on the first one, I stunted the tail, blurred the ear pink, and blurred the shading and highlights. On the second, I blurred the white patches. I would have stunted the tail on the second one, but I couldn't figure out how to copy and paste the lineart of the stunted tail on the first one, on to the second one Night  Fall 23:08, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

I could help with the line art. But I like the first one. His tail is supposed to look like a rabbit's tail, so maybe make it a bit fluffy and shorten it. Lighten the tail more-- Night s h i n e   R  23:40, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Night :) I shortened and fluffified the tail Night  Fall 00:00, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I shortened the tail on the other one for you-- Night s h i n e   R  00:19, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should blur the ear pink (on both of them) and also, I think you should stick with the first one because some cat images colored by artists can be wrong. 雨 晶須  01:36, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the ear pink on both. So, you guys think I should go with the first? I think perhaps I should go with the first too; Rainwhisker is right about Wayne getting the images wrong :) Night  Fall 05:55, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should go with the first one-- Night s h i n e   R  06:02, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe, in the gallery of his article (if there will be one) we could add his grey version as: Alternate grey version. Just a thought. Raffyjack123 10:38, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

That was my original thought, but I don't think it's really necessary. Like, if we had an alternate image for every character Wayne messed up on...wow xD So I'll just go with the first :) Night  Fall 20:42, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit bigger. Ashshadow. Got Cake?  14:54, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Center the earpink. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? Night Fall 08:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yes =) Nightfall, you astound me with your use of the blur tool; truly amazing. Comments before approval? -- Sandy star 10:06, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy, that means a lot :) Night  Fall 00:28, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Approved.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 21:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (Q)- Approved
The stripes just... don't work on the queen image Dx Dark hallows 01:04, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink. Lighten the shading a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  01:37, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too jagged or crooked. Her warrior image stripes are much more umm straight, like this:(Graymist) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 01:42, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

That's just a furry pattern. The stripes are pretty much impossible to copy without it looking awkward. Dark hallows 03:32, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

One word. WOW. Shady, this is incredible! Define the stripes on her forehead more Night  Fall 05:41, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe we should see about adding that furry pattern to her warrior image. It does look like an almost different cat now. Ashshadow. Got Cake?  14:48, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I really do not want to see this beautiful image go to waste over something such as additional texture. I think it would be fair to approve this (it truly is stunning Shady, as always) and see about adding the 'furry' texture to the warrior image during Tweak week. That is the only real difference between the two after all. -- Sandy star 10:10, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

That sounds fair enough. I'll add Graymist's warrior image to the nominations for consistency issues. Besides the texture, are there any comments before approval? --Bram ble 16:45, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 21:02, June 30, 2010 (UTC)