Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 27

Cave-Guard Blanks - For Approval
They're baaaaack XD With Shadowedheart's permission, I am now doing the Cave-Guard Blanks again. They took forever to make. I used many references to get the anatomy right. But, enough about that. Constructments? --Hawktalon Talk 13:14, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, these look great! The front two legs look skinny, though, compared to the big hind legs. These are probably the best cave-guard blanks I've seen, great job! --  Icy -chan  13:52, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks a bunch, Icethroat :D Love the new sig, by the way! Thickened the forelegs. Better now? --Hawktalon Talk 15:50, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

These are way better than the ones I put up... Just two things: First, the part where the two forelegs connect with the chest/belly, the two lines are go too in into the legs. Just shorten them a bit. Second, the part where the tail on the longhairs connects with the rest of the body needs more of a curve, not a straight line. Otherwise, they're great! By the way, Icethroat, love the new sig! --Rainwhisker 09 15:56, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thankies, Rainwhisker ^-^ I fixed the afforementioned areas. Better? --Hawktalon Talk 16:11, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

The tail on the shorthaired ones looks kind of... odd. --Bluestar1776 17:17, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

So, how do I fix them? --Hawktalon Talk 18:29, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Make it more pointy, like the tail on the longhairs, but not too pointy. Thanks for the comments on my new sig! --  Icy -chan  18:36, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the tails on the shorthairs. And your welcome, Icethroat:) --Hawktalon Talk 19:06, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

I think that you may need to move the showing hind leg infront of the foreleg.-- Shad owed  heart  21:10, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm not sure what you mean. Could you specify it more? --Hawktalon Talk 22:04, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg's haunch looks tucked in, and when a cat sits, its out. The flat part on the front of the hind leg should be curved to look like its in front.Also, the front legs back around the hind leg is different on the long and short haired. Shad owed  heart  22:21, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ah, I see what you mean now. I fixed the legs. Better? --Hawktalon Talk 22:50, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --Hawktalon Talk 20:33, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Yup, much better. --  Icy -chan  23:01, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Anything else I need to fix? --Hawktalon Talk 20:57, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

I made an example: Note that I didn't bother to add mud streaks. I had no trouble coloring it in. --Rainwhisker 09 14:26, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Cool! And anyway, i don't think that cave-guards have the mud on them, only prey hunters. i beats me, i don't really know much about the tribe. just thought that i could put out an opinon of mine. --Honeyrose34 21:17, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow, these are incredible. I honestly don't see anything wrong. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:57, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Um, I think that if I real cat sits (because my cat is sitting right next to me right now) the leg on the left ( to our sight) is not that fat. Faithlark Talk :) 22:24, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, but remember, Cave guards are big they've gotta be big enough to fight off eagles and such--Nightfall101 22:31, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall's right, the legs are big because they're cave-guards. I can't find anything wrong with these, either. --  Icy -chan  22:46, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

The legs should be a little smaller, they may be cave-guards, but they are still cats. Also the longhairs have no fluffiness on the further leg.-- Darkhallows 23:35, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I disagree with you, Shady. I think the legs are in a nice proportion to the body. Hawktalon, the only thing I see that needs to be done is to get rid of the far haunch. In real life, a cat at this angle would hide the haunch. I've demonstrated on your female short haired. Other than that, the hind paw under the tail looks a little awkward. That's all. -- Bramble -san  02:12, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Got rid of the far haunches and fixed the hind paws (I hope). I don't think I should mess with the hind leg until we get to a final decision on what to do with them. --Hawktalon Talk 16:07, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

hmm...the eye looks to big to me..it could just be me. Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:16, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - They look good! Personally, I like the leg the way it is now. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:32, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I like how they are now. And I like the eyes the way they are=)--Nightfall101 23:49, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Bramble -san  21:52, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. Awesome job, Hawk, they look great. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦Contribs 23:28, November 25, 2009 (UTC)