Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 97

Gray Wing (L) - For Approval
01:40, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

My child. He's missing his little ear notch. 04:52, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Gray Wing deserved better. 08:22, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

A babe - he should have a darker nose (his star image shows him with one) 09:55 Mon Feb 11 2019

Re-uploaded: 11:41, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Gorgeous! What is your light source here? 14:33, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Top. 18:44, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

If it's coming from the top, wouldn't the tail shading be on the bottomside of (on the section going out from the haunch) and then probably less on the tail tip? Also, could you connect the > front arm's elbow and the haunch on that side with shading?

Re-uploaded: 03:10, February 12, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the light on the muzzle? 03:34 Wed Feb 13 2019

Re-uploaded: 00:57, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

I have been given permission to take over and finish this charart. 03:26, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

Firestar (L) - For Approval
01:40, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

rip our hero 02:27 Mon Feb 11

could you add some shading depth to the neck? 04:14, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget the torn ear! 04:51, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 08:22, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define that haunch shading. 10:00, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 11:41, February 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry to break, but with the source the shading wouldn't go that far downwards on the neck/chest, I'd recede it upwards, and the tailtip would need some light if it's from the top. The tops of the ears would also have less shading, if the light is directly above.

Re-uploaded: 00:55, February 14, 2019 (UTC)

I have been given permission to take over and finish this charart. 03:26, February 14, 2019 (UTC)