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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. -- 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oof sorry been super busy lately. Im not sure I have to fix the crop now? If this is approved can i do it then? - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation
it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. top left corner. 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good!

'''reuploaded. '''

Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from this version, as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... ​​

Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base​ because she was the OA. 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. ​​

'''reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? 17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws.  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, too, overall. 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail. 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? 01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

After a month of it being on the approval page, the image will be declined, yes. Can you define the light on the tail, and just a tad bit on the front leg closest to us? 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the shading could still be lightened overall 02:45, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

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'''reuploaded. 23:08, July 27, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image still appears to be overblurred, try checking your layers for waste and removing it to reduce the blurryness. -- 23:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC) '''reuploaded. meadowslip, have mercy on me.'''

Lighten/smooth the shading. -- 01:36, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 03:00, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out more. Here's a little tip: If you're constantly being told to smooth out the shading, smooth it out a lot more than you usually do. I learned this and it really helps, trust me. -- 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. 19:47, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:59, July 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image has that overblurred look to it again. Try checking for waste to remove or see if the background is acting up. -- 20:02, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:56, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and add more shading depth in general to the image. -- 22:06, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:22, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Erase some of the shading on the tail to define the lightsource, and add some more facial shading? 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 16:19, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I'm still not seeing much light on the tail. -- 16:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 19:26, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the other half of the tail. -- 19:28, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Leafpool (K) ~ For Approval
01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body should be thinner (you may have to add more after that), and the tips of the ears should be dark brown, too. 03:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't really be texture, just smudge lines from the stripes.

Reuploaded I might've did a thing 20:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are less curvy on her other images

The stripes also appear to be less soft and slightly sharper on the other images. -- 18:59, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Yes? No? Maybe? 02:27, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes more. -- 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Attempts were made 15:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes appear not as dark on the other images and they have this sketchiness to them...try running a small pencil tool on low opacity with the base color over the stripes and see how that works. 23:15, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes also look slightly overblurred

Reuploaded y'know I was so confident when I uploaded this the first time... 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

For a lack of better phrasing, the stripes on the other images seem less broken up. The dorsal stripe also seems to be thinner. Also, the stripes still seem overblurred

Reuploaded y'all are killing me 16:51, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (K) - For Approval


22:41, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little and it could just be my phone but I think the shading is leaking a little at the bottom of the haunch 02:30, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

20:39, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. -- 20:47, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

21:03, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I still think the shading depth should be defined. -- 21:16, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe it’s just my screen, but the shading seems to be leaking around all the lineart edges. 21:21, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a little darker? 03:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

04:26, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tidbit more. -- 15:44, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (W) - For Approval
gotta love rank mistakes. I'll. go fix the stripes or something later. Not feeling good at the present moment. ​​

Re-uploaded. Hmm.

Little bit of leaking shading right in the middle of the haunch shading. 19:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

I can’t see it. Could you redline where it is??? My eyes are horrible.

here you go! 16:18, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Morningflower (ki) - CBA
Attempted to match the apprentice. 17:34, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

do you want the file for the colors? 02:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

edit: the file is useless for the colors, but useful for how the image was intended to be done. 03:11, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sure if you could send me that, that would be appreciated! :) 03:24, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for the file! 02:02, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Gorsetail (TNP) (W) ~ For Approval
I think the shading needs to be smoothed some :/ also not sure how the tint came out 03:22, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Yes the shading is very blotchy. Could you expand it some on the haunch? That should help. And maybe de-saturate the tint a bit? 04:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading from the haunch is leaking onto the leg, and the shading is leaking on the back paw farthest from us. -- 15:15, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading entirely 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Don't forget your sig! Smooth out the shading overall. -- 17:05, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded idk what you're talking about I totally put my sig in last time 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt W) ~ For Approval
No idea what this pattern is or where it came from but it looked easy 03:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

It came from her official artwork, for reference. Could you smooth the tail stripes but a bit more, define the facial stripes, and add some shading to ---> ear? 04:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Add more depth to the legs and < that ear, and define the eye depth a bit. -- 15:16, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded that doesn't explain what this pattern is. This is not a physically possible fur pattern. What was this illustrator doing 15:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, espscially on the haunch and tail. -- 17:07, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:25, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT 3/3 04:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Same as above, but, could you also smooth out the lineart tweak a little for her leg? The bottom bit of the leg shouldn't slant upwards that much, I don't think, and could stand to be a little more horizontal? If you'd like, I could give a redline for what I mean?

Same as above, soften the texture and add more shading to the chest. -- 15:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Hey Max! A redline guide would be much appreciated! I tried going off Deadfoot but uhhh, his twisted paw is on the other side of the warrior, unfortunately. 16:07, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

re-up istill wanna get that redline but i tried it again just for my sake 16:33, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the leg, to make it more consistent with the image's lineart. -- 20:04, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reup 04:12, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart more around the paw area, but the leg area looks fine. -- 04:16, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Here ya go Bramble; here's my quick as redline - hope it helps! There'd also be another line where the paw connects to the leg, to show a bit of a twist - like on Deadfoot's old warrior for reference :D

re-up thank you SO much max 20:23, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the leg a bit, since a cat's leg is not that thin. -- 20:33, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

re-up forgot i was working onthis until i saw theother one get approved oops 01:36, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

The lineart seems slightly choppy on the paw, so smooth it out a bit? I also think that little triangle of lineart under the front paw should be removed as well. -- 01:46, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up you talking about the toe? 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

The toe on the raised leg, yes. Could you add more lineart to round it out a teeny bit more? Just so it doesn't look as pointy as it is now. -- 01:57, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

reup i personally likethe look of the toe, could we get a second opinion on that 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think in order to match the rest of the lineart, adding a few more pixels to curve it wouldn't hurt. Could you also remove the random line/lineart down the middle of the tip of the tail? 02:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up the tail thing oops, so is that an okay on the toe lmao. also i dont know how to go about curving so tried something, tell me how it went! 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ki) ~ CBA
at this point i'm not even sure what i'm doing.

You did fine Star Desaturate the tint a tiny bit on the white? -- 15:54, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

re-up thank you

The orange patches on her fur seem too saturated, could you darken them a bit 17:32, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Can I have a point of reference or something? Because when I colorpicked from the rogue this was the color I got, and the loner's color doesn't exactly work. If I'm being honest, the colors seem kinda inconsistent to me between the loner and the rogue.

I second Bramble. When looking at the rest of the set, the orange and yellow ish looks too neon. Try color picking from the app or queen; those seem consistent. The rogue seems to have a light source problem or something. 23:21, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

re-up

CBA? 21:07, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Alt. Ki) - CBA
None of her alt. images are consistent, so I tried to match the original kit. 21:37, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the tail patch a bit more. 03:28, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:32, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:50, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Alt. W) - CBA
Tried to match the original alt. kit. 21:37, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the tail patch, and where the orange/black meet on the tail patch. 03:28, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:32, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:49, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Mosskit (TC) (Ki) - CBA
An attempt was made (matched to the Star because I couldn't colorpick from the original kit). 21:58, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the patches should be a tad sharper, and there should be a white line through the middle gray haunch patch as seen on the kit. 03:30, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:32, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:49, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Leopardstar (W) - For Approval
this was so hard why was this so hard, mainly reffed the starclan  00:29 Mon Jul 29

No one knows Can you define the tail stripes a teeny bit more? -- 00:31, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 04:56 Mon Jul 29

it's a mounty pattern I think there's more variety in spot size, and the base seems lighter on the apprentice image, which came first.

Longtail (W) - For Approval
01:03, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Does the tail lineart have to match Brambleshade's alt? Since it's a major feature and he's named for it, I think he does. though I could be way wrong, someone correct me if so -- 01:31, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

You're right, I'll ask them for it 02:09, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

reup 19:43, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I like this a lot. CBA? 01:48, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

UHH looks like I reserved the kit, but accidently did the warrior. Withdrawn! 17:23, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

ill just pick itup dont worry about it 19:14, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up so like does this goback to CBA lmao 19:18, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Sunstar (W) - CBA
09:10, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste outside the front paws, and the shading could stand to be defined on the ears and tail a bit. -- 23:20, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also a pixel of waste where the tail meets the hind leg and in the pixels between the hind paw and the <--- front paw. 01:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

reup 03:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:31, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Mapleshade (W) ~ CBA
*maple leaf rag intensifies*

I know its mainly in shading but can you brighten the white up a little? <span style="">08:51, 7/30/2019

re-up

CBA? 21:06, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Alt. K) - CBA
Why do I suddenly like making cats with texture?? -- 21:42, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

There's a little bit of waste outside the rear. 21:26, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 21:48, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:30, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Lakeheart (W) ~ CBA


CBA? 15:48, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Larksong (BP) (W) - CBA
I tried following all of her images for the pattern, since it seems to vary on each one. Colorpicked from the original warrior. 14:36, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

This looks gorgeous! CBA? 19:04, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Micah (K) ~ For Approval
It's a little baby Micah. 18:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Heronwing (TC) (K) ~ For Approval
18:19, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Mousewing (W) - For Approval
-- 22:33, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes should be blue to match the og warrior. And can you add some more pupil in <--- eye? Looks a little off compared to the other. I think you're finding your groove with these images, Potato! 01:46, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded *dies of embarrassment and pride* Thanks! -- 01:51, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Dark-colored ThunderClan kit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Hopefully you guys like it? Im really not good at shading because there are no tutorials for Pixlr char art --Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:11, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Since this is from a manga, this needs to be in grayscale and needs a lighter muzzle. -- 23:13, July 30, 2019 (UTC) It is? What is grayscale? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:31, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Grayscale is the default manga color, so this must be defaulted to a darker gray. Could you also define the shading? -- 23:32, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

So a dark grey? With grey eyes? or can they stay green. And I can try shading but I dont know how to chade on Pixlr X which is what I need to use now... Thanks! Also Is there any other single colour blanks to do? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:37, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I would probably use a different program than Pixlr, such as GIMP or FireAlpaca, which are both free. Only the pelt would have to be in grayscale, the eyes and ear/nose pink can be any color you wish. You shade by getting a color, using the pencil tool to draw it on the pelt, lighten it, then blur/smudge it. -- 23:41, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I have a chromebook and am only allowed to use pixlr X... Im confused also by what you mean RIP... and ok! SO a dark grey pelt Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:43, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so you have a color wheel, right. Well, click on any color you want, then get your paintbrush/pencil tool and paint it following a clear light source like this, and then blur/smudge it with the respective tools to get a nice, smooth gradient. -- 23:46, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

I cant use the blur tool won't work? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 23:53, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

Try setting the blur tool at 100% strength and check the hard-edged box and see if it works then. -- 23:55, July 30, 2019 (UTC)

It seemingly appears pixely and won't smooth out? Sorry if this is getting long... Should I delete MY messages? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, all messages must stay on the approval page until the image is archived. I'd say post for now, and wait for further instruction. please excuse my lack of knowledge -- 00:03, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Its cool, Thank you! I will try to do it as best as possible. Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

NOOOO I just finished but then my wifi went out before I had saved it 0.o Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:39, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better? I have a version with the pencil lines but it doesn't look very good. If you dont like it could you fix the blur as pixlr just wont? Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:31, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Please do not thumb your images. I've also renamed this to File:BP.kit-4.png so please continue to reupload over there. I'd also like to reiterate what Potato said that it is probably best if you do not use Pixlr, as it does not have a good history with images in this project. There are other free art programs, such as GIMP and Firealpaca, that can make this process easier; plus there are several members of the project who are familiar with those programs.

The shading should be darkened a little more, and maybe smoothed out. Your light source looks very good. ^^ 01:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! I found a tool but it is a bit hard to use... would this next reupload be more along the right lines? Also whats Thumbing? And ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Thumbing is when the file name has a |left/right/thumb thing in the file name. To remove it, simply go into source editor and remove it from the name. -- 01:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded uhh ok! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:00, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Upload under the name Vec gave you. Smooth out the shading everywhere, and Remove the waste that's outside the lineart. -- 02:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

I think that might be the best I can do shading wise :( I did upload under BP.kit but i called it BP.kit-5? Hopefully, that was right... And can do! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 02:04, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

No, you need to upload over File:BP.kit-4.png. Simply click on the link, scroll down and click "Upload new version of file". Also, remove some of the shading on the tail and front limb; a similar light source that's easy to see is File:Dawnpelt.kit.alt.png. See how smooth the shading is and it's not covering all of the limbs? Try to match that. 02:08, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the base quite a bit, since the description is dark-colored kit. -- 02:29, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Mothwing (Kit) ~ For Approval
my wife 00:55, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Remember not to thumb your images! Smooth out the shading on the tail and define the light on the foreleg. -- 01:22, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

same. could you define the dapples? 03:02, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! i cant believe i forgot to de-thumb it who am i 14:24, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Minnowtail (K alt) ~ For Approval
colors from the old kit

Nightwhisper (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 02:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Nightkit (BP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 02:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Night (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 02:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Nettle (DotC) (W) - For Approval
I really love how the texture came out on this. -- 02:53, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

i like it too! she looks pretty cross eyed. 03:01, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! -- 03:12, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Right now it almost looks like there's none. 03:34, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 03:37, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the main body and maybe smooth out the shading there? It looks... off right now for lack of a better word. 12:44, July 31, 2019 (UTC)

Berrynose (K Alt) ~ For Approval
His poor little tail. 18:59, July 31, 2019 (UTC)