Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Weaselfur (W) - Tweaked
to reduce the white to just the paws. OAs: Sandstar, Jackelo, Shelly, Trollsky. this might look bad due to the fact that im using a different art program than i was before.

Could you add some shading or define on the back farthest paw and smooth out the front paws' white? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:21, May 8, 2018 (UTC)

Still working? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 14:32, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt L) - Redone
yay, he doesn't look like plastic. Also, please don't make me change him to be actually red; fox-red is ginger.

I love the coloring! Define the shading on the chest? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 17:43, May 10, 2018 (UTC)


 * Or maybe define the shading overall. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 21:40, May 10, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tinkered with a few things.

Sunstrike (Star) - Redone
Hmm, after almost two years, can I still art? You guys be the judge. 01:13, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

This is awesome! Soften the white patch a little. 01:16, 5/11/2018

Define the shading. Also, the white patch is only stated to be on the head and not on the muzzle. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 01:23, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I lost the file due to reinstalling an earlier version of GIMP, so I had to redo it, and I think this looks a tad more like my cat. 06:33, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the flank and tail. 06:35, 5/11/2018

Re-uploaded: 06:54, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading in <-- ear. Beautiful!! Needletail 🐾 #Litten 10:33, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 14:08, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Brighten up the white, it looks the same shade as the rest of the pale parts.

Do you mean the white on the forehead? 17:35, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Yup, that's the only place she should have white anyways.

Re-uploaded: 17:44, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Sunstrike (Warrior) - Redone
While I was doing this, my cat (who this pattern is heavily based off) just kept watching me and now I am frightened. 07:01, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's very beautiful. Define the shading and maybe make the white spot bigger on her forehead. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 10:32, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 14:09, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

The white StarClan image seems to stop between the eyes, while here it goes all the way down to the nose. 17:51, May 11, 2018 (UTC)

Strikestone (W) - Redone
This looks so much better. OA was me, redone design. <span style="">19:31 Fri May 11

Reuploaded Texture layer was turned off. <span style="">19:33 Fri May 11

Strikestone (Ki) - Redone
OA was Burnt, redid the design. <span style="">19:35 Fri May 11