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Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it. 01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, can you Shelly? I don't want to waste time trying to get them right. 15:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

My pleasure. I re-uploaded it, here's the changes since they won't show regularly: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/9/96/20120402190120!Ferncloud.kit.png 19:02, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste down by her paw on ---> side. 20:45, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart also seems a little thick on her left hind paw... 01:54, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks Shelly~ 19:57, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's also waste on her paw on <-- side. 13:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:39, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked
Eh...I just realized I forgot her facial stripes...and the stripes on the lower part of her hind leg...I'll add those in in a bit. I'm the OA, and she needed stripes on her legs, tail, and face. Comments? 16:22, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added those in. Changes are here. 03:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little more? 01:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you centre the earpink a bit more please? 02:08, 04, 04, 2012
 * You don't have to if you don't want to. 02:52, 06, 04, 2012

Reuploaded. I'd rather not...it's about as centered as it can get. Changes are here. 14:06, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try to match the stripes on the kit? I really don't want to tweak them again, sorry. I also got rid of the spots among the stripes since, on a spotted tabby, the spots don't mix with the stripes on the points. (points being legs, tail, and face) 00:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think the stripes on the alt queen are fine. If memory serves, I think Leggy had this reserved for the stripes first, and this seems a lot easier to match on other images. No offense, but I can't really tell what the stripes are on the kit, and even if I could, it'd be hard to match since the kit blank is a lot smaller, then the queen. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Since Rainly's was reserved and posted first, I believe the kir should match this. o3o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Frostclaw (W) ~ Redone
White kitteh~ <333 OA was LightMoon with a redo by Rowan. Shading was flat. Comments for improvement? File changes aren't showing...yet. 19:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a tad? 20:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

And maybe lower the opacity of the shading ever so slightly? 23:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:24, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Also, I didn't lighten the opacity of the shading because I like it the way it is. 23:25, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (W) - Redone
Comments? :3 OA was Dappleclaw. 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ;3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'highlights', darken the shading on the back, add depth to the eye (or define it), and to add on to what Skt said, make the earpink more triangular. 16:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC).

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 18:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

For some reason it's not reuploading and sparking Mooneh rage. >.> 18:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I got it. Re-uploaded. 18:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Move the ear pink more into the ear and lower the opacity a tiny bit. 19:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit as well~ 23:07, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading. 03:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had the black cat expert around me, and this happened. x3 00:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading 00:50, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:13, 04 09, 2012

Darken the whole image a bit? He looks dark gray now. 07:29, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit too red. Make a bit more pinkish? 21:10, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:14, 04 11, 2012 13:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bouncefire (A) ~ Redone
Comments? 17:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely :3 Smudge the earpink a tad. 19:17, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/add shading to the ear farthest from us, and blur the haunch shading~ 20:02, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a tad? They look hard-edged. 22:57, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I shall. Sorry, I've had a ton to do this week. I'll take care of it tomorrow. 03:29, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (W) ~ Tweaked
She needed a plumy tail. Breeze whisker  21:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

It kind of looks a bit boxish to me... Can you round the top? 21:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a bit too plumy... Maybe thin it out so it looks a bit like Squirrelflight's tail? 22:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know. Squirrelflight's tail is "bushy" not "plumy" I can thin it out a little, but I don't think it needs to look like her tail. Maybe it would be better if I were to lengthen the lines showing the fur how it is now so it looks longer, and maybe curve in it a little. Breeze whisker  03:31, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I mean keep the fluffiness, just make it a bit thinner and maybe make the underside like Squirrelfight's and point the tip a bit more. 04:11, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya make the tail highlight (or whatever) look more silvery like the other patches of light? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 20:30, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thin it out just a tad, and maybe make it more ragged or something x3 07:26, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, you can work from this image for reference on floofyness. I'd say at least have the lineart on the tail showing fluffiness extend inward a bit more. 20:31, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) ~ Tweaked
Sgbiergqerngngtrbh I fixed the blurred/miscolored lineart, changed the earpink, and defined the shading. It's almost redone but I did go through the tweaking process. OA was Cloudy and Icecloud33. Comments? 01:18 Mon Apr 9

lighten teh shading 01:20, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bloooooooo!!!! 8DDD 01:26 Mon Apr 9

psst. Mounty. I reserved this first~  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 03:39, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

* facepalm* Well I'm stupid. You can take this XD. 03:40 Mon Apr 9

'''Reuploaded. ''' mounty's was better ;.; -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 03:54, April 9, 2012 (UTC) Blur the body shading. 08:52, 09, 04, 2012

Blur the earpink, too. c: 07:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing because stupid me lost the layers... ;.; (and I really don't want to retweak it) -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 19:10, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Imma stealing it back :3 23:24 Wed Apr 11

Runningwind (A) ~ Redone
Here it is. I tried really hard, so... Comments away! Oh, and OA was Leaf-storm.

05:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The color looks like it has a little more yellow in it than the warrior. 22:55, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:22, April 10, 2012 (UTC

Define the haunch/tail shading. My gosh, Thistle, this is so perrty~<3 09:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thankies. :3 23:04, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the brown a tad duller. :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:23, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes fade out just a bit. 05:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (Alt. CG) - Redone
Muuuuud >:D Needed to be light brown, not russet, and though this wasn't mentioned in the nomination, he's shown as shorthaired in the picture not long. OAs were Mistypebble and Wildheart. Comments? 11:33, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Lvely~  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 13:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 19:46, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  22:33, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blahhh :P *remembers own image* Yuck :P Love it, Paleh! Can you define the shading in all? 21:11, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (W) - Redone
OA was Mistystar with a tweak/redo by Bloo. The shading needed to be darkened, the colors looked a bit off, and the smudgings made her look all ruffled and spiky. 23:05, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but as far as I know I don't think it's possible to have white patches like that. Either only on the chest, paws. etc. or thebase coat white, but I don't think patches like these are natural. Move them around or get rid of them all together? 12:31, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed the white patches. Changes aren't showing. 01:07, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. The orange by it makes it hard to see. 12:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:56, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Tweaked
There's so many OA's for this...Sandwhich, Bramble, Insaneular, Appledash, and Oblivion. He needed a pale belly to match his leader, but I took a few additional liberties to ensure their consistancy. The earpink didn't match, and the base pelt had to be darkened slightly, hope you guys don't mind. He might have had to be tweaked later for that. Gah, this one difficult tweak...though I'd kind of like his other images once I've done Mapleshade. Am I crazy? :P 23:27, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the tan a bit? 23:53, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks almost ''white. ''Darken it up a bit. 21:17, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Who's charart are you looking at? It's the same color as his leader's. 21:24, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:49, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) - Redone
Oh god. I made it too red didn't I. ;-; OA is Hiddensun, and his colour had to match his apprentice/deputy image. Maple On dA and Skye

00:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC) OA and reason for redo? And yeah, I think you might have made it a bit too red, desaturate him a bit. 03:29, 10, 04, 2012

There's waste all around the image, Maple. 05:58, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors are off, and the highlights look a bit pink, could you fix that? 06:46, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Waste removed, Highlights fixed, and less red. :D Next? Maple On dA and Skye 21:07, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors still don't match. :S 23:19, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit of waste on the left border. 07:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) ~ Redo
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderleg (W) ~ Tweaked
Darkened base pelt color, re-did shading and ear pink, and I'll add the graying muzzle now... (forgot about it). OA was probably Sandy, with a redo by me. 8D 17:20, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I don't get how Spiderleg gets gray flecks before Dustpelt.. xD Can you enlarge the earpink a tad? 21:07, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, everybody's getting so old; Graystripe should be an elder now. Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  23:58, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:57, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the grey a smidge? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:02, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:46, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sagewhisker (MC) ~ Redone
PSE was being stupid, so that's why this looks bad. OA was Yukitora and Night shine. The highlights were too think and the shaded needed to be blurred. 23:44, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:45, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

She needs long whiskers. 23:55 Tue Apr 10

Lighten the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  23:56, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading more dynamic. Also, your light source isn't really consistant, the light source needs to be at one end of her body. 00:00, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded As you can see, she got a major redo. The lines are texture, and that bright part on her haunch is her base color, not a highlight. 19:01, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her. She's supposed to be white, she looks silverish. 19:09 Wed Apr 11

Reuploaded  19:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the pelt/shading a little bit more? 22:45, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - Tweaked
I wish I could re-do this! Original artist was Sunspirit, with tweaks by Wildheart and Rainfacestar. The shading needed to be blurred and darkened. Look here if changes don't show. Comments? 01:04, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading even more? 19:59, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 01:52, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Bramblestar (A) ~ Tweaked
Hey guys! I put a pale belly on him. 8D OA was BeautifulOblivion. Comments? 03:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Realized there was waste on muzzle. 03:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

He needs paleness on the underside of his tail. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge it, please, and have it come further up his neck to match the other images. 04:36, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Also, it needs to be darker and under the stripes, not on top of them... are you the OA for this version of the image? Because I noted in my nomination that first dibs go to OAs that have the layered files. 04:38, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's also some waste around his chin and chest. 00:07, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I don't have the Original file sooooo. I guess I'm giving this up. ono 03:26, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Duke (KP) ~ Redone
Woo 8D I know the earpink is weird, I'm fixing it in a moment...the collar, ears, and eyes are the exact same, so I'm not changing them. Comments? :3 17:12, 04 11, 2012

The eyes look kinda pixily, make the eye gradient smooth  17:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, I can't really see it. 17:17 Wed Apr 11

Re-uploaded. 17:37, 04 11, 2012

Maybe make the black on the haunch curve a bit more? :3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 10:04, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail stripe to make it flow with the pelt more. Skt, I can't, because I'd have to paint over or remove what's on the haunch now, remember how I blurred so it looked the same, and then it would curve...I tried, and it looked unnatural. Sorry Dx <span style="">12:00, 04 12, 2012

Psssh, no apologise, twas just a suggestion. ;3 Make the nose pink a little less neon, and define the earpink a smidge? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ro Alt) - Tweaked
OA was that weirdo Ivystripe. She needed white patches. I decided to add the scars since she was said to be a tortie much later, and could have gotten the scars in the DF as she aged and to match her rogue image now, and I added the ruffled fur, because I remember reading that she had ruffled fur. I do not have the citation on me, but trust me, she was described with it, and I'm not removing it :P This didn't come out as bad as I thought it would. 20:17, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (ki) - Redone
OA is...I have no idea. DX Anyway, it has to match his apprentice image. I think I did a better job on this than I did on the other ones. Comments? Maple On dA and Skye 22:41, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. c: 22:57, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading, actually. 23:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple On dA and Skye 01:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (E) - Redone
Hmmmm..... not my best. And I know, I forgot the ragged ear. I'll add that in a bit. OA was Sandstar with tweaks by Splashy and Bloo. Was redone cause the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 05:38, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Wing (KM) ~ Tweaked
OA of the current file is me, since I re-did it months ago. Needed to match the PH. Also, the mud stays. I'm not making it like Night or Rock or another cat. If a cat's got mud on them, it would be the entire body, not select spots.

Night's covered in mud.... 0.o But anyways, lighten the white. 12:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Look at the PH. I think it's fine.