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Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Ah, tweaking. =D Anyway, it was on the list for shading, so, I just layered some shading overtop of the image, not major or anything. Okay, I think the OA was Snowfeather1 with some help along the way from Night shine. Comments? 02:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and blur them 03:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and chest. Elork  01:48, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid the shading. x.x 02:32, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge, blur, and lighten the earpink. 20:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 23:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

And thicken it. 15:59, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, ya still working on this? 19:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Read my comments on Brightflower. 05:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Could I take over? :P 18:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 18:42, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I redid the shading and the ear pink and replaced the highlights 19:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, next time, change the heading. XD 20:22, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger. :3 21:34, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC)- Tweaked


I think I died while making him....I swear I did....Anyway, had blurred lineart shading was blotchy, needing a crusty/runny nose, and patchy fur, OC was Dawnfeather, With a Tweak from Ivyheart. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a missing patch of fur on his shoulder? And blur the earpink a little. 16:31, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, I tried to copy the patchy fur from his elder... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 00:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

But, the linearts are facing opposite directions, Maple. Give it a shot and see what it looks like. 05:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-The friggin' blurred lineart....ugh... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 23:24, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart - fix that. 01:49 Thu Feb 16

Uhg, those patches look unrealistic, sorry. Can we just redo these and retweak the elder image? 14:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yes please. And I personally think this should be redone. The shading's still really blotchy, and honestly it'll be almost impossible to get completely fixed without redoing. 15:01, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to agree with Shelly and Paleh on this one. And since three leads agree, and it was reserved/posted before the new Tweak Process, you don't have to re-nominate it. 8D 19:20, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Alright....Give me five mins. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 17:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) - Redone
Okay, this was on the redo list for the shading, blotchy highlights, and the patches could be more realistic. OA was Mousetalon. Comments? 23:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

<3 this Twi! Just lighten up the white a little. 23:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the patches a little less wildly smeared? It looks a bit strange for a short furred cat. 23:42, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, are you still working on this? 19:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, can't. My computer's being stupid and it erased half of my files. 04:59, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over, then. 17:02, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid her again. 17:33, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading; she looks a bit flat. 21:09, February 18, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded 22:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading a smidge. This is pretty<3 22:47, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) ~ Redone
Look up a rippled tabby and this is what you get. Also, the previous version was just a modified triangle tabby. I picked the color off an image of gold, but I might be willing to darken it a bit. I got permission to redo, OA is Hiddensun with tweaks/redos by Mintstarr and Icestorm. Comments? 23:35, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Nice. 8DDD 00:13, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Aww me wanted to do this :P Ah well, define the dapples and the earpink. 00:14, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty. ^^ Define the shading. 01:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. She also looks a little green to me... 20:24, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and she does look a little green. 00:43, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I was a bit afraid of getting too close to ginger, but I think this works out. 00:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Naaah, I think this looks perfectly golden. Could you blur the stripes just a tad though? They look very hard edged. 12:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 14:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading Sky Super pervetedness! 14:39, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:52, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the colour a bit? Compared to her ginger alt, this isn't all that different. 00:09 Mon Feb 20

In that case it's the ginger alt that needs to be more ginger. This is gold. Sorry, Wildy. 00:39, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) ~ Redone
Okay, it needed to match it's loner image, and it was pretty much impossible to tweak and get a fine result, so I ended up redoing it with permission. I did redo it, more of a tweak, on the same image, but I'll say it was redone, 'cause that's how it was except on the same image. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 00:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

His muzzle shouldn't be black, and make the earpink a bit more triangular. :P Sky To Kill An Empire 00:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the white on the chest paws and belly. 00:11, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the earpink by any chance? 01:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also redid the whole image because it didn't match the loner. 05:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Add the tufted ears ^^ 17:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 18:53, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Crop it some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  00:15, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Crop what? If it's the tufted ears, it matches the other images. 02:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I meant crop it around the lineart. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  15:06, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (KM) ~ Redone
Well... I was the OA, and she needed to match her prey hunter. Comments? 04:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

-wait- She needs mud. I'll add that in. 04:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

And a torn ear. I fail. 04:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes a bit, Leggo. 19:22, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

They should be more pointy as well. And the stripes on her tail go all the way around. 20:20, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just re-did her. I'm never making a charart at nine at night again. xD 16:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Add some mud :3 16:22, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate mud. x.x 20:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the mud a tad less greenish, 'cause it looks kinda green right now. 09:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you possibly define where the mud is? I don't know if it's just me but I can't really see it o3o 02:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad. Sky Everyone likez teh cats  02:33, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Petalfall (D) ~ Redone
Wee hee 8DD Before any one says anything about the style, hear me out. I looked up rose pink off the internet and used those colors. Then I looked up cream cats and tried to find cats of a similar color. The ones I found were tabby/spotted like this. OA was Bramble and was redone/tweaked by mintstarr. Comments? 05:40, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sooooooooooo pretteh! Blur the edges of the shading a tad though. *steals* 05:44, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! <3 Sorry...but I looked for rose-creamy colored cats on the internet, and I didn't find any spotted tabbies. Plus, that isn't a spotted tabby, those are just some markings. Unless you can give the link to where you found spotted tabby rose-cream colored cats, then I'd suggest removing the markings. 05:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The one I went off of are here and here. 06:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Well in realistically all cream cats have tabby stripes I think, most are just really faint. Those ones are just more visible than most. So I don't think you really have to put them on. But if you do decide to keep them, blur them a bit. 14:59, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It depends on the shade if they have stripes or not. And shade is artists choice. 16:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading tons, unless it's ment to be like that. <3333333 02:07, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Blur the shadin. c: Sky Super pervetedness! 04:13, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Gosh darnit Sky it was close to 24 hours XD 04:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but this isn't a proper spotted tabby. You'll have to change that, because I can't tell if it's a tabby or not like this. 03:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I re-did the pelt since the stripes and base had to be on the same layer. You might need to look in the file history. 06:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Heres a stupid suggestion I have! How about making the stripes kinda fade out in some places(like on the chest)? I dunno, maybe not, Im just throwing out ideas since in the pictures the stripes are really light and kinda faded. Uh, sorry if I can't explain it right. 07:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the haunch shading. Looks great, Mounty! 09:09, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaler. -- Elork   17:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Stoney ^^ I gave her a cream chest, I think that's what you meant Bloo. 17:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit ☾ ~Pouncey~  ☽ 21:44, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:13, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (R) ~ Redone
OA is Ashshadow, needed to match others. Comments? 00:39, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look less smudged on the other one. Also, it looks like something is running down from her ear. 20:56, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:28, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. Pretty! 8D 09:12, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

How can I do that without redoing the stripes? 16:09, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I think lightening the base coat might make the stripes more visible. 16:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MC) - Tweaked
OA was Shelly/Icestorm, and she needed her muzzle to match the apprentice charart. 8D 14:48, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make it looks more like her MC alt. 03:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? 18:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. L) - Redone
In all technicality, I went through the tweaking process with this, but nothing was really left unchanged in the end, so this'll be called redone. XD OA was Moonflight and shading needed to be redone. 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the --> leg and haunch shading. 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

It may just be my computer, but, he looks tinted blue...o3o <3   19:02, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred it to the max. And yeah, the highlights are tinted blue cause white highlights look awful on black cats in my opinion. 19:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him tinted a little less blue and more black? Sorry, but it looks kinda odd. He's smexy otherwise, though<3 20:59, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading as it is looks fine, but I do think you could smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. 01:04 Sun Feb 19

It's not fine...he looks blue. Black and blue are two totally different colors. If anything, just make it so the highlighted areas don't look dark blue. =P 01:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think Paleh can choose if she wants to change it, but in the defense of blue-tinted highlights, they do look much better, and more natural than white highlights. It's not like the picture is Bluestar's kind of blue :P 01:15 Sun Feb 19

Reuploaded - Well since I still don't wanna put white highlights on him, I desaturated them a bit, but they're still blue tinted. Is this better? 03:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, much better. If he were any bluer, I'd have voted to have his name changed to Bluestar. XDDDD 03:38, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the pelt more into the ear? 03:59 Sun Feb 19

Can you define the tail shading a bit moar C: 16:55, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Frecklewish (A) - Redone
This is the exact same as the MCA except without the herbs. Not really anything to change.... *shrugs* OA was Scarlet. 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

It's Frecklewish, not Fracklewish, so I fixed that for you. I agree, there's nothing else to change. 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Er...It's minor, but can you smudge the pelt into the earpink? 06:12, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) ~ Tweaked
Well, I haven't done a tweak in a while, so I thought I would just do a basic one. ;P So his shading was blotchy and needed to be redone, and it needed to be darker. 04:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a tad? 04:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Who's the OA? -winkwinknudgenudge- 04:30, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

...you just ripped the ear. Enlarge the earpink. 04:51, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry? Just because I ripped the ear doesn't mean I'm not entitled to some credit. And for the record, I also blurred the shading. Besides, I wasn't saying it just for myself, but for the actual OA of the image. 04:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anyways, darkened the shading and enlarged the earpink. OA was Sandstar12 with tweaks made by Bramble and Oblivion. ^^ 05:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define haunch shading? c: Sky Everyone likez teh cats 05:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the haunch shading. 20:42, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) - Tweaked
Okay, I will admit, I like tweaking her face. :3 Anyway, OA's were: Grayravenpaw, Bramble added transparency, Ivy during a Tweak Week, and LeafstrikeAsakura redid it. I tweaked the muzzle and paw lineart....Comments? 18:05, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (W) ~ Redone
Hope this is okay.. It was very fun making him. xD And thank you for Stoney who let me borrow the xcf. file ^^ Had to be redone to match deputy image, and since it was a triangular tabby. OA was Goldenpaw, I think... 20:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Very pretty Misty ^^ Enlarge the earpink a little. 20:29, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Upload it under File:Sharpclaw (SC).warrior.png ,20:30,February 19,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Knew I got the file name wrong or something.. >.< Renamed it and enlarged the earpink. Thanks Mountain. ^^ 20:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should darken the shading, it looks a little light next to the deputy image. Sky Everyone likez teh cats 02:32, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Ki) - Redone
M'kay, needed to be redone to match the deputy image. Original artist was moi. Kits are soo small! Dx 02:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

He's so cute! Spread the stripes out more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  03:34, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose pink like the kittypet and rogue images. 15:10, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

The nose pink is fine since the rogue and kittypet are going to be redone. Blur the earpink a tad. So cute! ^^ 16:54, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ashfoot (D) ~ Redone
OA is probably Sandy...and it needed to be redone. See the tweak page for reasons. You may have to check the file history for the changes. 03:32, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading a tad. c: Sky Everyone likez teh cats 06:26, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 06:28, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail tip, where the tail connects to the haunch, and then where the two back paws are. :3 06:49, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'd forgotten to clear the waste. xD 16:11, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ashfoot (W) ~ Redone
OA is Darkhallows (I think), and it needs to match the deputy image. 16:19, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Again, check the file history. =P 16:19, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I luff this! <3 Define the haunch "highlight". Also, fixed the heading for you. XD 17:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (A) - Redone
The last of her images 8D OA was Tawny, with a redo with the new blank by me. A bunch of people watched this on join.me also. Comments? 17:41, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W) - Redone
Okay, Willowclaw. OA was Bramble, then Sky. Was redone due to shading. :3 Comments? 17:46, February 20, 2012 (UTC)