Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes and make the ear-pink a bit redder 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The furry effect needs to be smudged an blurred, and perhaps lightened. It looks like tabby stripes on the brown. 06:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't smudge it, because it's smudged to the limit; but it has been blurred. The earpink will remain untouched, since it's from the warrior. 16:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brown's too dark and the furry texture still looks like stripes. 00:30, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Which brown? The main one, or the texture brown? 18:17, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

I believe she is talking about the main brown. 00:29, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

I got the main brown from the image, but I'll fix the fur texture in a little while. 19:10, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:19, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

The brown in general looks much too dark. It looks near black. Lighten it. 01:13, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:53, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture a little bit more, and erase some so that more of the base white is visiable~ 01:58, 30, 06, 2012

Perhaps remove a little bit of it, like stated above, but make it more transparent as well to give the shaded look. 17:25, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:18, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase some of the texture on parts that are highlighted more. Like, erase it a lot, so that only a little is showing. It will add a lot more depth and shading. Breeze whisker  17:42, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded After messing with it for awhile, I think I got what you were saying 8D. 23:33, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still seems kinda flat...try and define it, please.

Reuploaded The chest shading looks like the way it does because of the texture... o3o. 00:01, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt.Kit) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to match alt deputy. Not sure about changes. 17:58, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? Unless it already matches the deputy. 17:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:32, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

I tried a new method of shading. ...and it hates me... Re-Ups^ 23:25, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda dull/ashy against a brown cat. Thicken it a bit and darken it on the tail. Bright/define the ear-pink just a touch. 01:24, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ 22:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste around the paws. 00:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/round the shading under the chin and on --> side 03:49, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink match the alt deputy. (Although I don't think it really matters... e.e) 05:11, 01, 07, 2012

Re-Ups^ @DJ, I don't think it matters because the alt. warrior and alt. deputy don't match each other. 17:23, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. 17:25, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Breeze whisker  17:40, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded. 13:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste near his haunch (I think) and can you define the shading just on the tail? 15:41, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 02:58, 04, 07, 2012

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just made her a bit darker to match her other images. 02:20, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading, if possible?

Reuploaded  02:32, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad, and make the shading less brown tinted and more of a grayish color for consistancy. :3 09:22, 26, 06, 2012

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing, I believe. ^^  15:53, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the belly highlight, and the haunch one too? 17:49, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also blur the ear pink a tiny bit? 15:43, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the belly and haunch highlight and the earpink. 20:55, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the brown a bit more... of a greenish tint? owo To match. 05:33, 29, 06, 2012

Define the shading on the belly a tad? Skt Omnia vincit amor  13:24, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading on the white areas 03:48, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined/Darkened the shading on the belly and the white areas. I only added a bit of a greenish tint, since if I did it took much it would look too weird. >.<  18:27, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her midriff. -- 05:49, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded This shading is beginning to annoy me =.=  04:10, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Ki) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading. Changes might not be showing, and I personally believe it could be blended a bit more. x3 OA was Sunleap. Comments? 06:54, 28, 06, 2012

I believe someone forgot to add it when they put this on the tweaks needing to be done list, but this also needed to be darkened to match her other images. also, dull the highlights. 11:21, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Yeah I'm not very fond of this image. :P 06:05, 29, 06, 2012

Can you make the earpink less red and more pink? 00:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I took the color off the warrior image now. 03:01, 30, 06, 2012

Blur the shading some more some more, or lighten it. Breeze whisker  17:39, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Urgh, that shading. 07:48, 02, 07, 2012

Can you define the shading just a tad? 15:40, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Waste is a lie. 03:24, 04, 07, 2012

Birchfall (Alt. W) ~ Redone
I'm sorry, but there was no way I could keep this a tweak. I never had original layers for this one, since it was my first approved charart from scratch, I had to re-do the coloring, the fur length, and, frankly, that horrid shading. x.x OA was me, as my mini-rant states. XD 00:43, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

I just realized I made the shading wayy too dark. I'll fix that in the next upload. 00:44, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the shading a bit? Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 00:47, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit. 00:52, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a touch more and thicken it. And redden the ear-pink a touch more. 03:45, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and blur it too~ (shading) Skt Omnia vincit amor 01:58, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded. I've grown to hate this cat.... ._. 03:10, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Y u hate Birchfall? xD Define the shading on the paws. 15:22, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Everything ._. XD I swear that the shading is really defined now, you just can't exactly see it because I had to lighten it. 02:40, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (KP) - Tweaked
What's this? A tweak I haven't failed epicly at? It can't be! But it is. Anyways, this is Sol and all I did was add mottles, but I don't think the changes are showing. The OA was Iceheart Darkhallows, I think. Comments? 11:56, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the orange less.. eye-burn-y? 21:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

How? 00:19, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

I believe Loonie means to make the orangle less saturated and reddish. ouo 03:34, 30, 06, 2012

Still working on this? 00:01, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) - Tweaked
She needed to be brought back to the color she was before to match her other images, and actually be dark cream. I need to fix some shading, I know. I'll do that in the next upload. Breeze whisker  21:26, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, define it, and make it more triangular. 22:16, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe tinge the shading browner/redder. She looks kinda ashy/gray. 00:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. (Yes, the highlights are tinted green.) Breeze  whisker  00:56, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the base just a tad? It doesn't quite match the other two images.

Make the earpink more triangular and a tad smaller. 01:03, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/redden the ear-pink 03:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's all I'm going to do with the earpink. Breeze whisker  17:37, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and perhaps make it thinner around the back area. 21:01, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading along her back looks fine...but maybe define the shading on her legs a tad? 01:18, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Needed ragged fur (Changes may not be showing yet) Ohgawd I killed it Comments? 01:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. -- 16:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the ragged-ness? O_o Maybe make it match her queen? 16:22, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, wouldn't her fur be a bit more ragged as both a loner and rogue, probably from the fighting, and all of that?

True, but I think it could be toned down just a tad. XD Skt Omnia vincit amor 20:18, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 <span style="">04:47, 01, 07, 2012

Blur the tail shading. Nice job, Stoner. 21:00, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Wait - should I tone down the furriness or not? I dunno...but I kinda think that the queen has a little bit of raggedness... 23:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know, but it makes more sense for her to be fluffier when she's outside a Clan and doesn't care about her appearance. I think it should stay... 23:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dark (TB) ~ Redone
My first charart is redone~ 8D Back into doing chararts now, wee. I think I made him too dark (and not because his name is Dark, Loonie D:<), but I'll just wait for some input. Comments or concerns anyone? owo 20:58, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mud o3o 21:01, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the base pelt color a tad so the shading stands out. 21:24, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Great job, Splashy. Lighten the ear-pink and add more mud streaks. 20:58, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I couldn't add many more mudstreaks without him looking like he has brown patches. 03:57, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color. 04:02, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 19:00, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define and blur the shading? 15:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Ok, before anyone says anything, the original shading on Cinderpelt's first kit made the new shading really hard to blur, so I just redid it all together. Recent OA was Iceheart. 15:09, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry...but It was nominated for a tweak, the vote passed, and so it should be a tweak.... *shrug* 17:40, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I got permission from a SW before I redid it (Trolleh.) But if it needs to be tweaked, then I'll simply tweak it. 18:34, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, if you had permission, I guess. 18:33, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken, thicken, and blur the shading. Blur the ear-pink. Excellent job, though. 20:56, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are not showing, but if they are the older image doesn't look scaled. 19:16, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and define the rest. (If I am looking at the correct version) <span style="">01:50, 03, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 22:28, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (KP) ~ Tweaked
Shading and earpink needed to be defined. Wee. 19:20, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blue her earpink a tad and round it, and Slpook? This is her KP image. Not her kit image XD 20:30, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed the title. Fff. 22:42, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:52, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cody (KP) ~ Tweaked
I swear on my life this is tweaked. I magicwanded the stripes and put them on a different layer then filled the space in on the base coat and then lightened it. I smudged, darkened and thickened the stripes and defined the shading (it disappeared and the eyes kinda did too (smart me)). So yeah x.x;; (don't kill me) comments? 06:43 Tue Jul 3

Make the stripes thinner. 15:24, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink match the queen. 16:50, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Point the stripes a touch 01:17, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and make them more blackish. <span style="">03:55, 04, 07, 2012

Ratscar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
All I did was add the torn ear and scar, of which came from the warrior. OA was Silver. Comments? <span style="border: 2px solid violet; border-top-left-radius:2ex; border-bottom-left-radius:2ex; border-top-right-radius:2ex; border-bottom-right-radius:2ex;"> 11:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and make it more pinkish? It looks gray right now. 15:36, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:53, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be longhaired. Sorry I just realized a small part got cut off. Don't worry, Ivypool is next. Low battery, sorry. 21:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on her chest. 22:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Her tail looks sorta flat...could you define/remove some shading...or add a "highlight"? OwO 22:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the body shading. <span style="">03:59, 04, 07, 2012

Ivypool (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked for jacked up ears and a shading tweak. I hate how the new shading looks, she looks silver now. I might redo the ears and everything when I get ahold of my flashdrive. Meh. 21:43, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a bit?

There's some waste leaking out of the ears. 22:19, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading. 22:19, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ro) - Tweaked
OA was Paleh, and she needed to be... floofy? I dunno. Ohgawd why do I fail so much. 22:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (W) - Tweaked
She needed ragged fur. OA was Ashshadow with a tweak by Mintstarr. 23:05, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cloud (Storm) (KM) - Tweaked
- Shading needed to be defines, color needed to be more white, and because I have the layers I colorized the mud to make it more brown. :3 23:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the mud spots a bit? 23:39, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink 01:15, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 03:22, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:34, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the mud a bit more... texturised? owo So it doesn't look like she's got brown patches. (Couldjust be me) <span style="">04:13, 04, 07, 2012

Littlecloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and it needed to match the other images. <3

Lighten the shading a tad. It's adorable. <3 03:27, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not.

Littlecloud (W) ~ Tweaked
OA of the most recent version is me. Everything matches the MC...so...yeah...xDD

Twist (R) ~ Tweaked
The most recent OA was some sexy person. 8D I just had to tweak the facial stripes and I wanted to saturate the ginger some more. x3 04:30, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

can you make the ginger more gingery? It looks brown ._. 04:58, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes on her face just a tiinnny bit? And maybe define the orange brown markings, (Unless its the lighting on my lap top). Looks Epic! :3 08:52, July 4, 2012 (UTC)