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Cloversplash (W) - For Approval
Comments? I love that clover leaf. 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

She's dark brown, I'm v sure the splash should be clover shaped. It should probably match what the old one shows.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading needs to be smoothed out around the chest/legs and there is a bit of waste by the tail 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It says shaped like a clover leaf, not a clover itself. I'll fix the base and shading tomorrow *decides to steal Loudbellys coloring*. 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

a clover leaf is a clover lmfao, either way it should resemble the shape of a clover. Shouldn't the coloring match the old one???  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with mink :/

04:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't the clover technically the whole plant, and then a clover leaf is an individual leaf? I'm not sure, but Potato might have a point. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

no, lmao. the shape on the muzzle doesn't even resemble clover leaf, I said that this should match the colors and design of the old one  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:59, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I know what you were saying, I was only arguing about the "clover leaf isn't a full clover" thing. Anywho, Potato I think there's waste on the actual lineart of the tail, as well as near it like Ty pointed out. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  05:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

didnt we aree that all iamges should match the old one or whatever 12:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

If that's true, I'm fixing it right now. 13:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded So I googled a clover leaf and what I got was a full clover, so I matched it to best of my ability. 13:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to be the unpopular one here, but I think Potato and Jose were actually correct. It should be one of the leaves, not the entire plant. It explicitly says "a clover leaf", and if you look it up... you get things like a three or four leaf clover, meaning that a "clover leaf" is singular. You were correct in your statements, Potato and Jose. Please go and change the marking back to how you had it, but perhaps shrink it just a little bit. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded  16:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

It says that the white flash is on her nose, and this looks like it's on her forehead. Could you move it down so it touches the top of the nose? Also, can you curve the haunch shading to match its shape? 16:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the shape wider and kind of heart shaped. These are clover leaves for reference. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded me tries  16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

You could do something like this maybe. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:48, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch shading  Ellie  life is an illusion 19:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded arghhh  19:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you also define the ear pink? i cant really see it espeically on the < ear  Ellie  life is an illusion 20:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There should be light on the legs with this source  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:16, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The source is fine- this was used on two other images. See below. 13:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

While this source has been used, those other images have a lot more depth on the front legs so they're not all flat; if you could do that some, that'd be great.

Reuploaded  23:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears very blotchy on the haunch. Could you please smooth it, along with on the front leg closest to us? 23:25, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate the haunch shading  00:28, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail - just a little bit, and maybe extend the shading on the back leg so it reaches <<- that way more? This looks amazing, Potato!

Reuploaded thanks! 00:43, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on both legs and the tail could stand to be smoothed more. There's also waste by <- that ear. 14:18, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:13, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth of the eye color and smooth the haunch shading

Reuploaded *internally screams at haunch shading*  01:35, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the light on the legs, or fix the way it transitions from the top. It seems abrupt to cover the whole legs instead of equally transitioning. So maybe smoothen the top part up and add just a tad of light to them <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:23, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't want to define the light on the front leg farthest from us much more or the chest shading is going to look weird. 22:26, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:59, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to break, but I do still think the haunch shading is sharp - minimal chance has occurred, and the more hidden back paw would be completely in shadow with this source, not in half. I also believe the facial shading should come out to cup the chin to avoid flatness, and it's leaking away from the lineart on the belly and < ear. To earlier comments, I believe the shading on the < front leg needs to stretch higher on one side only, because it kinda just cuts off at an awkward place with minimal taper

Reuploaded New shading, new source. I like this one better. 16:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Better yeah. I'd fill in this spot with shading; theres a bit of a gap between the chin and shading on the > side of the cat which seems out of place. I also think the haunch shading could be smoothed slightly, and you've got waste around the paws

Reuploaded  17:46, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

The haunch shading seems to have gotten sharper this revision, truthfully, try smoothing that again, and a bit on the < front arm?

I'll reup later, but just so you know there's been a power outage where I live, so my comp doesn't work. -- 19:49, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar (K) - For Approval
I don't think the back paw farthest from us would be showing, so I didn't add it. Anywho, comments? 13:52, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the black paws a bit more? 16:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waster, and it looks almost like there's a gap in the haunch shading. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 16:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the gap in the haunch shading is intentional, Baykit's source has the same gap. 16:43, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little overall. 18:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

The black on the hindleg needs to be higher. As his others show it about just about a bit of his ankle wise so both would almost cover his back paws completely.<span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:18, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a patch of shading leaking onto < side of the haunch. 22:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Its leaking on the stomach too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:44, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading

12:24, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:03, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:48, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:27, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Same comments as on Bluebellkit, and also smooth the tail shading

Reuploaded redid shading  22:31, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you taper the <--- end of the haunch shading so it doesn't end in a bulk? 23:06, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:14, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Same as the other <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:19, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the haunch <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:01, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Not breaking CBA, but there's waste above the ears, below the elbow, and right of the rear  01:21, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

It's gone now. 01:26, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I apologize for breaking CBA, but the haunch shading appears blotchy - can you smooth that so it's consistent with the rest? There's a small spot by the base of the tail that lacks shading and appears off, can you fill that in? The shading on the arm, flank, and tail could stand the be smoothed, those areas look bold compared with the rest. Just smooth the edges a bit so it's more gradient, but doesn't end up losing the depth it has. Black on the front paw looks a little soft, can you make that a just a tad  sharper? The earpink on his other images is more saturated than what you have here - can you fix that? There is also a tiny spot of waste by the hindleg farthest from us. 01:51, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded darn tail on this blank  02:12, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the black should extend further on the black paws; comparing to the deputy, it shows that the whole bottomside is black of the elongated foot shown, and then most of the top. I also think a little black would show on the other back paw as well.

Looks better. I think you forgot to saturate the ears^^ 02:20, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I did Patch, it may be hard to tell because of the shading. 04:25, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded just let me know if you want the paws to be extended more or the earpink to be saturated. 16:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I do think the more visible back paw would be completely filled in, while the other > one needs it to just go and cup the heel. I also believe the nosepink needs to be darker to match the other images.

Reuploaded  17:52, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
"me? i loved him."

Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

re-up

This might sound a bit weird, but can you lessen the shading a touch inside the ear? Cats' ears can be on the translucent side so I don't think the shadows would be quite that dark 04:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-up nah you're good

Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval


Smooth out the haunch shading a bit? 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

honestly it could be smoothed out everywhere

Could you curve the shoulder shading up onto the shoulder. Right now it seems like it stops abruptly there and kinda throws it off a bit. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

re-up Mink, can you explain? I'm not quite sure of what you're saying. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:55, 6/06/2019> ​

Its definitely 100% optional, but curving the shading to form along the shoulder, like at the very edge of it so it isn't straight and appears 3d instead of 2d <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:23, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading depth to the arm? And perhaps define the depth just a bit on the tail and by the chin/muzzle area. 01:59, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think I see a little leaking shading on the tail. By the way, you may wanna put your signature next to the image because it disappeared. 16:07, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Beetail (W) ~ For Approval
Let's try this again. Tinystream (talk) 02:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This should match the star and the deputy. The stripes on these seems thinner, rougher, and more bunched up together. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:40, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This actually matches quite well, Mink? Could you possibly define the shading depth on the chest (near the arms)?

The stripes don't seem to cross like this on the others unless my computer screen is showin it too dark. They're also more smudged and rougher looking <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:23, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Mink. The stripes appear rougher and closer together on the other images. 18:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

https://www.ezimba.com/work/190603C/ezimba15349395102400.png here's the unshaded version to help with stripe placement. The colors look good

i think there's a line of waste under the tail... i forgot to remove that too in mine

Reup Sorry it took so long, I've been busy. Tinystream (talk) 14:02, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

can you add more stripes to the tail? and smudge them to match the others in the set? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

I also think tapering and adding various sizes of stripes would also help. 20:06, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out? 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out more. It's still very sharp, and the revision history shows only slight changes.

The design was supposed to be sharp, so I'm tryng to smoothbit as much as I can while kesping the shading design. But yeah, ill fix that <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:45, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think if you lighten it just a little more, you can remove some of the sharpness - but Spooky's comment still stands, its still sharp.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:41, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading leaking away from the lineart on the belly, underneath the tail, and on the > back leg. If could nab away waste floating about and add some light to the tail tip as well, that'd be great.

re-ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:30, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the back of the head/neck area? It looks rather blocky in comparison to the rest of the image.

Dragonfly (Ki) ~ CBA
imaliveiswear

00:49, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a dorsal stripe and I think the stripes are more jagged. 01:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

19:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the dorsal stripe? Im having a hard time making it out, or matbe thicken it some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:25, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Reuploaded

00:22, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Apple Blossom (W) ~ For Approval
okay thats enough cat doodles for tonight

01:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

The colors dont quite seem to match her others. The stripes should be sharper and the design should probably match the style thats going on there, she seems to have side stripes more so on her other side which should probably match this side too in style <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i think you should darken the shading a little :O 18:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Reuploaded

19:35, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

there's a line of waste underneath the tail and the back paw furthest from us doesn't seem to be filled in

Still working?

Reuploaded SCHOOL'S OUT!

00:23, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yay Ari!! Anyways, that back paw Moonyy mentioned doesn't appear to filled in. All I see is the background. 00:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded pftttt

00:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face around the muzzle 04:56, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There should be one more tail stripe. 20:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:09, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Nice job, Ari^^ Smooth the shading in -> ear, maybe even lighten it a little. The stripes appear softer on her other images, could you blur/smooth them some? And sharpen the white on the head, it looks a bit too soft there. Disconnect the ear and face white on <- side? I don't believe it's supposed to be connected there. 02:13, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (Kit) - For Approval
hi. my naem squidwardo. i draw katz. i believe this is freegame so its time to get revenge on this pattern bc if u didnt know my first charart was one of alders set that got declined. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:50, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add variation to the flecks, and define the gray flecks. 02:51, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the gray flecks tho

04:13, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I do agree, they need defined <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:16, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Would you care for one of the files? I have the hunter, and I think I still have Jayce's old warrior. 14:56, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you thin out the shading and possibly change the tint? It's throwing off the color and making it look extremely different. I know tint is often a choice, but this is making it look very red.

Still working?

Still working, gonna try to re-up by at least tomorrow <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 20:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 05:12, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt. K) - CBA
this was actually difficult; tweaked the mouth lineart a tiny bit, but added shading to try and show the "twist" + added some bit of a lip to show it more?

Could you possibly show thw tweak a bit more? I'm not really seeing it? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:18, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

There’s only so much you can do with this angle - I’m gonna wait for more comments before changing anything

Maybe you could make his tongue poke out? I think that'll get the message across. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:53, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think the only way really to show his jaw would be to flip it but I'm not sure that's allowed? 20:29, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

It might worth opening up a discussion for it, seeing as this alt is very noteworthy for Crooked (and for any other characters and blanks this might affect)

I agree. I posted a discussion here. 15:59, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded flipped the kit for now; seeing as the discussion has been in favour of flipping the image

should we flip his other kit image just to make it look consistent in the gallery? 05:11, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

That would actually make sense to show the difference between the alts <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:09, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think that would work. CBA? 20:59, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Approval
My first charart ever lol. (Hand drawn shading, not texture) <span style="">15:29 Wed Jun 5

Could you add some shading to the hind paw? 15:37, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think there'd be a touch less white on the tail, basing off the apprentice

Could you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:27, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this tomorrow. I'm exhausted from work the past few days oof <span style="">22:25 Sat Jun 8

Reuploaded <span style="">14:19 Sun Jun 9

Could you perhaps even out the transition between the draw-on styled shading vs. to where it kinda becomes the typical blurred style? It's just right there where it switches over that looks a little off to me

Brightflower (W) - CBA
I really tried with the flat face but it still came out iffy. 16:11, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her earpink is a little too neon and doesn't match her other images in the set. 22:21, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

You could probably make the muzzle look more flat by raising the nose and putting a line over her nose bridge, to give the illusion it's scrunched up. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:12, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I raised the jaw as you said and it looks so much better. 16:05, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading transition on the visible back paw? I know it splits at the toe mark, but it still appears abrupt

Re-uploaded  19:55, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the front and hind paws closest to us 02:21, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  10:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:18, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Ambermoon (Alt K) - For Approval
love the new blanks. Very cute 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:17, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:48, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the tail from the haunch shading. 01:09, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  02:02, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading. 16:13, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define it some when you do expand it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:11, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's always shading... you'd think I'd know how to do it by now 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source- where is the light coming from? 19:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's coming from the left--where her face is. How would you emphasize that? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

With that, there shoud be no shading on the top of the tail. 22:52, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

To add to Potato's comment, to make it as coming to face, there wouldn't be any shading on the < side of the haunch either, the shading on the bottom of the tail would extend to the tailtip, there'd be more on the > side of the arm, and some extending to the chin.

Reuploaded Completely redid shading. With my luck, probably made it worse, but, whatever 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (W) - CBA
04:21, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:02, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:04, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes looks a bit too brown in comparison as opposed to more red. 08:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:18, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes should go over the paler belly/chest. 00:27, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:56, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Aspenfall (W) ~ For Approval
tried to match the old warrior, was hard since it shows a different side. i put that weird splotch of grey near the chest because i thought the old warrior patch would be sliiiiightly visible. the rest i just tried to match the style and the patch placings on the back? i also colour-picked it for everything

edit: i now see the waste oops, i'll remove that next reup

expand & darken the shading to the right of the image? <span style="">20:10 Thu Jun 6

expand the white in the eye, i can barely see it 03:48, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups did the shading, but the pupil and white placement is the exact same as what i've used for all my other warriors, so i'd like a second opinion before i change it

Add a bit of shading at the base of the chest to connect with the > side of the cat


 * I think I still have the old file if you want it 04:53, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reups the file would be great thanks! my email is moony24683@gmail.com

reups wasn't much i could do about the patch placement because of the blank's orientation, but the colours now all match but it's only a sliiiight difference

Cherrytail (K) ~ CBA


define the depth in the shading on the haunch and face 03:49, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

CBA?

The patches should be smoother and not as rough, as shown on the File:Cherryfall.apprentice.png. The tail markings also don't appear to match it either could you fix that to match the design the old warrior and apprentice have as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:26, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the tail markings do match. I altered them a bit, but nothing much more I can do.

I think the markings could be softened more, as they dont seem so rough on the others. They're much softer on the edges and not as pixelated <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:14, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I ran a blur tool through the patches, not sure how much smoother I can get

It looks good now, is that white on the lower arm? I don't think that would be there since the white is on the chest and the angle the blank makes it so you wouldn't see that I believe. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

That is the chest, no?

I've personally been treating it as the arm on my images, except for those handful of pixels to the very < side

Re-uploaded I actually thought that was the chest

Re-CBA?

Appledawn (W) ~ For Approval
It's the only one of the set, so there's nothing I have to be matching, right? I also don't know if I'm happy with the eyes or texture... 00:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

We recently agreed to match the old images, so this would have to match the old warrior. But I think the colors match close enough with the exception of the eye color and ear pink...the stripes should be curlier. 01:04, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading and shading depth?

Define the light and the pupil in the eye 02:22, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be a bit thicker. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:39, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, that was painful. Am I allowed to keep the texture? I don't think the old one had any... 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It did not have texture, as far as I'm aware.

Do I have to remove it, then? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It does have to match the old image, so yeah

Reuploaded Well, that's annoying that I wasted so much time w/ the texture, but at least it's easy to undo 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, and expand it on the back?

Shadowpaw (Ki) ~ CBA
07:17, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

idk if you already did this, but I was asked to make the eyes more amber when I uploaded his mca. 13:54, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded literally 3 pixels changed, seems like a waste of time but lmao 20:09, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Rileypool (W) ~ CBA
13:52, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define light on the ears and smooth shading on the far foreleg <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:27, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 17:50, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Mudfur (W) ~ CBA
13:52, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Dappletail (W) - CBA
Yay managed to snag three torties! - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add/expand the ginger patch on the back? this orange patch. And maybe define the stripes? 00:22, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Vec means dapples^^  00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried with the ginger patch, but I don't think it would show up with this angle. the starclan cat seems to show its back and/or the top of the leg and I don't think it would be that visible. If others disagree I'll expand it more. Also what specific dapples? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:36, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Just the dapples in general. I'm having a hard time seeing them is all. 03:18, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I actually did define the stripes in the ginger patches, as Vec originally said. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:24, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:06, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (W) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hate to be that person, but would she get a warrior image? 00:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think she would, as she was a Early Settler, then medicine cat. 00:44, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think this is actually a mistake from Secrets of the Clans. To my knowledge, I think she was called a warrior at first. It would be a mistake.

I just had a look through my copy, and I couldn't find anything that directly stated she was a warrior - or what rank she was prior to her medicine cat appointment.

Dusk Nose (Ki) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

you need the file? also, could you smooth out the shading?

I think the patches are...streakier? Have more streaks in them? 00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think I need the file? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

The black patch on the head should be covered in ginger. On the hunter it's covered in shading

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I meant the area behind the ear. sorry for being unclear

Sneezecloud (Alt Ki) - CBA
It's not white, it's pale.

Maybe make that pale more noticeably less white? Malina457 (talk) 19:21, June 7, 2019 (UTC)malina

It's not white though, it's more of a silver. I've seen lighter on images before.

even so, at a glance it registers as white, and I think that's really what matters even if it is technically a very light gray. 19:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not with my images, because everyone knows that I use pure white if I'm adding white. I'm not going darker than this, because it clashes with my colors and honestly ruins what I had going for this.

maybe try a different tint? because it does look pretty white to me 00:10, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Running the hex through a colourhexa, it says is a very light grey, so I don't Jayce should have to change it?

I was told to remove the cream on Dusk Nose because it looks white in the context. I don't see how this is different.

Personally, I think it looks gray enough. 00:24, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

yeah, i was told to remove the "white" on multiple images like shade pelt and lulu, even though they both weren't actually white but they looked white. imo it should probably be changed as per past decisions, especially since its causing so much controversy. also, just because the hex is a light gray doesnt mean that how it looks in the context of the image should be disregarded, as per what you yourself said on dusk nose, max 00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

it doesn't even look white. it's clearly light grey. the whole point of this shit is just to dodge around the no white rule and we all know it, like feel free to nominate those to add it in if you have to lol 00:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

the rule technically is, as far as I'm aware, is that there is to be no white on torties not cited with white. This is very clearly going to a medium gray. It's not white, and therefore not violating the rules. Fox, you were asked to change the color, not remove the paw coloring altogether. I'm not going any darker, and that is my final say as the artist. Everyone else gets artistic liberty, so I really don't understand why people don't seem to want to respect mine. If I make it darker, it will clash and look disgusting. It's gray and does not break our current rulings.

That is definitely a white gray, it looks fine to me imo. Could you define the shading a tad? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:15, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 01:21, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) - CBA
an attempt was made .. this pattern was hard to match for some reason 18:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The earpink looks much lighter on the apprentices? Though that could be the shading. 00:37, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded it was the shading but i still tried to make it lighter 00:46, June 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I feel like the fur looks lighter on the apprentice as well? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:04, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:49, June 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

you probably dont need it, but i have the file if you want it 12:36, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

nah i think i got it, but thank you ^^ 14:05, June 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 01:23, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Adderfang (W) - CBA
19:05, June 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you define the mottles? This is very pretty ^^ 00:38, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you!! 00:49, June 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 01:25, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Whorlpelt (K) ~ CBA
19:43, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define/maybe thicken the arm shading just tiny bit?

Re-uploaded. 12:37, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Rainflower (W) ~ For Approval
like this one so much more than the old one :p

00:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading lines to smooth out the transition on the shoulder shading? The very top. And some more on the haunch and tail shading, too, while you're at it. 03:20, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading. 00:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading just at where the tail bends in the middle, and define it on the < ear?

Reuploaded Tried my best with smoothing it 17:53, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Benny (Alt. Ki) ~ CBA
Currently nominating his kittypet alt. to be gray. If it fails, I'll change it to brown. Comments? 01:46, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Uh shouldn't this be brown anyway pee the cite? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

No? The cite only says "he's a tabby like me, only darker". That quote actually implies that Benny was originally meant to be a darker gray tabby.

Oof, i read brown on that for some reason. My bad. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:26, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Primrosepaw (K) - CBA
i love her name so much

I don't think you can post this yet. We're only doing redone warrior and kit images A-D, except for OA claims. Unless there's something I'm missing here. 01:53, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'm the OA, just its my old username (..Raven)

Ahh, right. I forgot. Maybe define the shading on the tail and white paw just a tad. 01:58, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the haunch and tail some, maybe darken the shading by a small bit? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:16, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

CBA?

Dewspots (W) - CBA
i should prbly actually read the guidelines imma doofus  trying for a more traditional spotted tabby  04:51, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Cherrytail (W) ~ For Approval
wad made to match the old warrior since that is first in the set, also match to the apprentice. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading depth on the back paw closest to us; the shading looks darker than the rest of the image. Also, define tail shading near the base of it.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:31, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white paws, some

Branch (K) ~ For Approval


Add a little bit of shading to the middle section and the top of the arm?

Can you darken the base? It seems to be lightwr than the old one <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reups colour-picked the first colour from the kit, but tried to find a darker colour to colour-pick. also hope i got what you meant, max? if not could you please redline since i don't quite understand

You're all good, you got the area I meant so no stress! :D

Dawnbright (W) ~ For Approval
There was an attempt made.. if I'm not allowed to keep the textured shading i can remove it! 13:14, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Its definitely allowed, could you darken it actually <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

should have "for approval", added it for you.

14:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you brighten up the white? If you're matching the old images (which as OA of the set, I'd like that), I used pure white for it.

The shading depth can also be defined as well. 17:58, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

yikes my memory is concerning Re-Uploaded! 19:38, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes just a bit on the head? 20:08, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnbright (K) ~ For Approval
she 13:14, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Same as warrior <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

what i said on the warrior.

14:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Same as warrior; brighten up the white.

Re-Uploaded! Is this better? I kinda overworked it.. 19:45, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

could u define the shading a bit? i know this might mess the white but i can barely see it. 02:32, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Nightcloud (W) ~ CBA
OA claim given to me by Jayce, thanks bro :)

14:05, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:26, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Milkfur (MV) (W) - For Approval
what the heck was my middle school self thinking???? 14:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste under the tail, and there seems to be many uncolored/unshaded pixels on said tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:27, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Berrynose (Ki) - For Approval
Hmm... I have regrets. Tried to match the apprentice images. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing until the image number is lowered. 16:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There is enough room now for this image. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Un-withdrawn due to space. 18:50, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Base needs to lighter to match the other images in the set. 19:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is called Juni colorpicks from the wrong place on the image. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think the texture should be softer

Reuploaded. 01:15, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lessen how high the shading goes on the haunch just a little

do you want the file? also, the texture has more shape to it rather than just being lines 12:54, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

The file would be greatly appreciated. My email is mello.roxas13@gmail.com 15:25, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the texture for now, and also fixed haunch shading. Will probably mess with it more once I have the file. 15:49, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Darktail (Ki) - For Approval
He looks far too cute to be Darktail tbh. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing for same reasons as Berrynose's kit. 16:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)  The page is currently at 60, so I believe this is allowed now? If so, un-withdrawing. 18:49, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the white? 20:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

The black should be sharper on the booty <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:07, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the patch on the eye? This is adorable! 02:30, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Still too cute to be Darktail imo. 15:29, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (Alt. W) - For Approval
And Crouchfoot makes three. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing for the same reasons as Berrynose's and Darktail's kit images. 16:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC) The page is currently at 60, so I believe this is allowed now? If so, un-withdrawing. 18:48, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I think it's fine. I'm having a hard time distinguishing the base from the lineart. Is there any way you can lighten the base? 20:38, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm just bad at colorpicking today it seems. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe lighten a little more. I still can't see anything rip

Spireclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
17:35, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the transition from the white fur to the black fur should be blended out some. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  21:42, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think it would fine since this is the OG design. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

it looks just a tad softer on the warrior, so I have to agree with jose here. 23:13, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:14, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think you just uploaded the old file? 01:17, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Uh no. Patch added more white fur to the haunch.

01:36, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

No, she accidently uploaded the old one, Spirekit.kit, and it was showing as a redlink since that file was deleted. However, she fixed it before you commented. 01:38, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think there's an awkward match of missing texture right above the tail? It could be the shading, but I can't tell. 02:04, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Above where the tail meets the back, I mean. 02:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did I get it? I also made the highlights darker. 02:25, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sandynose (Ki) ~ CBA
17:35, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:30, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Dawncloud (W) ~ For Approval
Changed the colors to match the others -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:45, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad softer. 21:03, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe curve that stomach shading just a little more? It looks a little hard-edged, but, that might be because of its placement on a stripe too?

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:17, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) ~ For Approval
All colors from mc/rogue images. 00:41, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

This might be the same case as Dappledpelt, but, was he directly called a warrior in one of the field guides?

Crouchfoot (K) - For Approval
Will probably define the shading a bit more tomorrow 01:11, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

reup 18:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Nectarsong (K) ~ For Approval
OA claim given to me by patch :)

01:51, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the foreleg shading a bit? 02:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups

02:20, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

could you possibly darken/define the texture just a smidge? 14:21, June 9, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Oddfoot (K) - For Approval
warrior isn't in use so new pattern kids

didnt we agree that unless you're the oa, you have to match the pattern in the set, even if its not in use? (which was the entire outcome of the shade pelt drama) 12:53, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Max is the OA, they said earlier that they are the OA especially since the warrior isn't in use. So this is fine imo. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

but hes not the OA of the warrior, is he? 15:11, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Checked, and the OA of the warrior is Paleclaw. 15:24, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think the difference here is it isn't 'not-in-use' in the way that's 'we removed all the kits and warriors to re-add them to pages' but rather the 'not-in-use' in that Oddfoot's warrior is an invalid cite with an image that was just kept of courtesy. It's not going to be redone into the set like Shade Pelt's needed to be, and this is a single by count. And since it's an OA single, I personally think they can do whatever.

The warrior isn't in use due to an invalid cite, meaning Max is free to do whatever they want with the pattern. There was no proof that Oddfoot was a warrior, which is why the cite was removed.

Night (HJ) (Ki) - For Approval
Oreo cat returns, and yes the shading is tinted purple.

Could you define the shading some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Where? Because I can see it pretty clearly pretty much everywhere. o.O

Rushtooth (W) - For Approval
Everything from the DF, including shading layers/opacity. <span style="">14:24 Sun Jun 9

the stripes look thing on the others, could you possibly thin them out some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is over the page limit of 60 images. 15:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Never mind, some images were archived. 15:29, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading a bit. 20:10, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt W 3) - For Approval
It is the only one for this description, so I can change the pattern, since it was also my original image. I prefer this one lol <span style="">14:24 Sun Jun 9

Same as Rushtooth, this is over the page limit. 15:02, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Read above ^^  15:30, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Wavepaw (K) ~ For Approval


Could you smooth out the tail shading?

Bouncefire (W) ~ For Approval
this was fun 17:06, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Patch Pelt (Ki) - For Approval
Any advice on how to shade this would be appreciated. The colors are straight from the file for Milkweed's queen, which I got from Jayie. I wanted to try and make him match his mother in coloring. I'm thinking of going and adding a little more black to him...

Re-uploaded. I could not get that to work, so I did a few things.

Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 19:44, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit and maybe lighten it some. 20:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)