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Violet Dawn (Hunter) ~ For Approval
ooff that face tho, lemme define that depth there quick lmao 18:23, September 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 18:26, September 8, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth a bit. 19:48, September 8, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading too Malina457 (talk) 20:49, September 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

She also needs her darker markings on the paws and ears 21:25, September 8, 2018 (UTC)

Her lower belly shading looks a little strange and clumped up, can you expand that shading to the rest of her belly?  HA WK FI RE98  14:02, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 19:51, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

14:17, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry to break the CBA here, but could you define the face shading? I can hardly see it. 22:13, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Do these have the black paws or am I blind?

I agree, the black needs to be defined a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  16:07, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink so it matches her other images. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:10, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Still working? 20:07, September 15, 2018 (UTC)

Black Ear (hunter) ~ For Approval
he looks like he could be from one of swedens 50 metal bands.

00:54, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

XD He does, define the front leg shading, particularly on the <-- front leg Malina457 (talk) 04:23, September 9, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Re-uploaded.

18:56, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

Could you extend the tail black a bit further down? Proportionally it should go a tad lower 20:42, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

20:50, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

I don't know if its just my eyesbut the shading seems to be coming away from the lineart a tad abut halfway up the tail and by his butt stars. (I did base him off a KISS member. fun fact.) 22:12, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

in the other images, he had 1 stripe on the front paw farthest, and in the other images, it is a black patch on the back legs. and can you bring the black on the eye to a point like on the others? These are the exact mistakes I would make if I did this! Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 22:27, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not sure what you mean by black path on the back legs, unless I'm missing something.

23:45, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

The eye markings seem softer on his other images, could you smudge/blur those to seem a bit softer? Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 23:53, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

00:19, September 10, 2018 (UTC)

so I see how you did it on this, but the first stripe, on the others, looks more like a spot, can you make the first stripe mach?Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 04:45, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Which stripe? "First" isn't being specific.

13:47, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Not sure what Owlbite is referring to, but the shading is leaking alongside the length of the tail. And I think the nose pink is bleeding out to the muzzle by a pixel or two? 19:02, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

..., sorry, Im bad at explaining things, but the stripe on the foot, not the leg, to me, on the other images look like it is a splotch, if you need, I gan give a example picture. Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 22:16, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, that would be helpful.

00:53, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

It is almost up to the next stripe Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 05:29, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for Vec's comment. I put it up higher since I assumed it looked lower on the warrior, given the fact it's sitting and the legs will be sort of folded in. May I get a second opinion on that?

14:39, September 13, 2018 (UTC) Oh wait wait, ignore me, you mean the stripe over the one on the foot needs to look more like a spot? (just woke up so idk) But yeah, before I change anything about it, can I get a second opinion?

14:41, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

I honestly still don't have a clue as to what you are referring to, but I believe the image matches the warrior pretty spot on. 19:06, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

if you still dont get it, and Vec agrees, than you can just ignore me, Im just padantic, but can I still after all my nonesence, ask for you to smooth out the ear pink, or am I just insane? Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 00:07, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:00, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Flower Foot (Hunter) - For Approval
Yikes I'm not sure this looks very good..  HA WK FI RE98  22:27, September 10, 2018 (UTC)

The stripes go all the way across on the main body, and don't taper off how you have it. You also need to reupload over File:Flower Foot.hunter.png. (this version had the right idea for the stripes, speaking of.) ​​​

I cant see the marking on the face. Like the 2 upside down "V"s, can you fix that? And ''how dose this look so good! Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 04:39, September 11, 2018 (UTC)''

Reuploaded. Messed around with the stripes a bit. Thank you, Owlbite! I tried darkening that forehead "V" but I'm not sure how much I can really define it on these blanks! There's a very limited amount of forehead space.  HA WK FI RE98  14:05, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smudge the stripes to match the others? They seem to be more smudged, the other images might have texture as well but I can't tell. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 19:20, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

There isn't texture on this set, surprisingly. ​

I mostly used the smudge tool to create these stripes, Mink! Could you elaborate to give me a clearer idea of how to make them look better? :-)  HA WK FI RE98  20:00, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

The other images are smudged to go along with what would be texture if she had it (she doesn't) the stripes just make it look that way. If you see how the warrior is smudged, it needs to look a little more like that. These stripes seem to blurry at the moment. If that makes sense. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 20:11, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sharpened up the stripes a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  20:36, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

Connect the facial stripes to the eyes, I think the dorsal stripe is leaking right along the middle of the back, and the shading is leaking along the tip of the tail. 18:49, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed facial stripes and erased leakage.  HA WK FI RE98  01:27, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Drizzle (Hunter) - For Approval
22:10 Tue Sep 11

In the other images, it has more gray, but hear, it looks like there is more white, can you add some more gray? Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:37, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Owlbite. It appears like in the warrior image (the one you're trying most to imitate), the gray reaches more into the flank area.  HA WK FI RE98  23:38, September 11, 2018 (UTC)

The warrior isn't the one you need to match, you have to match the first in the set and from the looks of it. It'd be the this one. Minkclaw after all this time? Always. 00:01, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

the kit is actually first, but since that's frontwards it doesn't help much. I agree that the grey extends further than it does here. 00:25, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:58 Wed Sep 12

I think the patches should be smudged more, to match the early settler Malina457 (talk) 01:31, September 12, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Ummm, sort of what was stated before, ut the shading looks like a shadow, can you make it blend in, or smooth it out to make it look llike,"shading"  and sorry if this at all seems rude Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 04:43, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

... We've had images tweaked/redone for over blurred shading. Imo it's fine, but can I get another opinion? This was shaded exactly like my other images that I used blurred shading. 11:43 Wed Sep 12

Shading looks good to me Sun Malina457 (talk) 12:17, September 12, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded Also realized I had the eye color as an old one. <span style="">13:11 Wed Sep 12

Define the texture on the face just a bit? 18:55, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Thorn (Hunter) - For Evaluation
Hope I did this right! 17:57, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

The blank is too small. Make sure you're downloading it properly. Try downloading it from here. If that's not the problem, then make sure you aren't changing the resolution when making the charart in your art program. Thorn's image also requires texture. Hope this helps. ^^ 18:58, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? There's tutorials here on shading if you're confused. 21:22, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

it should also be the short-furred blank as well. 21:28, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

^ so use this blank instead my bad 21:48, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Also, could you add/define the earpink? 00:21, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely redone with texture and defined shading & ear-pink -- 16:57, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

This is great! Smooth out the shading overall and definitely add some on the body and tail. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:05, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Lovely! Add some shading to the tail and add some definition to the eye color.  HA WK FI RE98  17:06, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Add the notches ears and define/make more visible the texture. 18:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and the earpink. 20:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Can you darken the texture by a few shades? I can barely see it. It seems much light than the others in the set. <span style="color:#B40431; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   after all this time? Always.  19:55, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (Alt. Healer) ~ For Approval
Comments? 20:58, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Make sure to add alt to the title! Anyways, could you smooth out the haunch shading? 21:00, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the tail shading? Oof, I love this Malina457 (talk) 21:01, September 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded. Also fixed the title. 21:09, September 13, 2018 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink at all, is that just cause the inside of his ear is muddy? Also define the eye depth a bit.  HA WK FI RE98  15:00, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add the patchy fur? I'm pretty sure it's supposed to have that. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 16:05, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

The citation for patchy fur is long after this mistake. The mistake is from Power of Three, and the patchy fur citation is from Omen of the Stars, therefore this alt is not required to have it. ​​

Ok, because the old version of this alt had it, so I wasn't sure. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:52, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:16, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Stoneteller (OTS) (Healer) ~ For Approval
The mud was fun. 03:37, September 14, 2018 (UTC)