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Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
Ima try this, trolololol Skt Like a baws  00:47, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt Like a baws  00:41, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Stunningly awesome <3 8DD Blur the leg shading and shoulder shading and blur the pale chest :3 00:59, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, lovely shield brother 8D -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  02:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ki) - Redone
Redone because the shading and the paw was wrong (that's not why it was redone..x3) -gives thanks to my friend who watched and critiqued- ouo Comments? 21:24, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

-Feels special- lolz x3 I sorta missed the bell adding part, so can you add a highlight/shine to it and move it two or three pixels up a bit? ^~^

Make the white less grey, and define the earpink. Skt ANZAC day  22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black a bit less pure black and define the earpink ( Maybe... |D ) 00:10, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...maybe make the collar more curved towards the center. 09:23, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I...have a bit of a history with losing files... x3 Yeah....... 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...could I take over? 22:17, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 01:04, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this?

Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3  03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.) 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. 12:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink and blur them higlights. x3  21:24, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste below the stomach. 21:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tear the ear. 03:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots more. 18:24, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... I'm gonna have a huge quitter moment but a) I hate this image, b) my blur tool won't blur the shading anymore, c) this'll take me much longer then the two week timespan d) I hate this image! So I'm withdrawing this. Anyone who wants this may have it. 23:55, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this. :3 02:12, 28, 04, 2012

Make the earpink more red. 00:11, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded -  Meh, this is a fail. And Sunnyfrost, if someone has volenteered to take over an image and they haven't uploaded yet, please don't comment. 02:07, 29, 04, 2012

Blur the mid-shading a bit, and get rid of the white specks on the tail and front paw. 04:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add the torn ear. 00:46 Mon Apr 30

Reuploaded -  -dies- Ew this image. Oh and I'll soon fix that black line from the tail to the haunch. x| 05:28, 30, 04, 2012

<3 Darken and blur the shading. 21:13, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Alt. Ki) ~ Redone
Shading issues. First and only OA was Mistfire. Changes are probably not showing. 22:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and if needed maybe lighten up the base color a tad? :/ 06:51, 27, 04, 2012

Define the eye depth. 07:27, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Knock knock  12:36, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry if the first image looked dark. I had no idea where the base color was on her old image @_@. 23:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 15:34, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink more pink and the nose black/dark gray. 18:09, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The nose looks black, but it's a very dark gray. 22:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It's very very hard to see the earpink on the right ear (our right). Define it some. 00:12, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

She looks more black than dark gray, in my opinion. Lighten her up. 13:58, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uh..she's supposed to be black. This is her alt kit. Skt Knock knock  03:44, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:14, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 02:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Silverstream (Q) ~ Redone
Queens FTW. OA was Sandstar with a redo by Iceheart22. It needed to match the warrior. Comments, questions, concerns...? :3

03:54, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made bright highlights. Yay? Better? 8D? 03:58, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit. =P Skt Knock knock  12:35, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reason being redone? Blur the belly shading, and it looks like there's a stripe of shading going down her belly, making it look uneven. Can you fix that? 01:05, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:48, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dat waaaaste. All below the image. 04:03, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:36, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlight and there's a lighter strip along the back of her tail onto her leg where the shading is edging away from the lineart. Make sure the shading stays constant there. 10:41, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:42, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. 09:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

If it's the right version, there's a little waste clinging around her neck/chest. Skt Like a baws  22:24, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:28, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (D) ~ Redone
Okay I know this was origanally supposed to be a tweak, but in chat Cloudy said that if it was impossible to tweak it could be a redo, not sure if this is what she meant but this is how I did it and if you want me to just tweak it then I will. But the shading needed to be fixed, the scars needed to be redone, and the earpink didn't match. The OA was... Scarletwind I think. 19:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a bit. 20:32, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 00:13, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

And define it. ^^ 01:07, 29, 04, 2012

Define the shading. 13:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/shoulder shading a bit more. 09:57, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:11, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Briarlight (Ki) - Redone
Changes aren't showing. Needed to match other images (took colors from warrior). Last OA was Silver. Comments? 21:21, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? 02:06, 28, 04, 2012

Nope, same color as the warrior. 04:17, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink. ^^  18:06, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit? 18:02, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the chest shading is fine. But its your call, Paley. 22:03, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. 23:03, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (W) ~ Redone
Redone for the same reasons as the leader. OA is Insaneular. Skt Knock knock 03:55, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

I defined the sahding, cause i hated it. Skt Knock knock 03:57, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the muzzle. 17:08, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 00:14, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink's fine. 03:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the muzzle shading is fine, but if anyone else wants me to, I'll do it. Skt Knock knock  00:06, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it a little. 21:49, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading a bit? This is awesome. <3 01:30, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Ki) ~ Redone
The shading and earpink needed to be redone. I know that the pelt color is darker. I'll fix it in the next upload. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:12, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and is the nose supposed to be dark gray? Can't remember if that goes with gray cats >.<  22:31, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It should be grey regardless, his apprentice has a grey one. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  23:02, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 <span style="">00:51, 29, 04, 2012

Re-Ups^ :S

Define the neck shading a little? 20:17 Sun Apr 29

Define the tail shading. :3 01:32, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (KP) - Tweaked
I despise how I did the old shading. Just redid that *cough*copiedthelayerfromfrecklewish*cough*. OA was Thistley, then me. Not touching anything other than the shading. Comments? 00:22, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 01:00, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink~ 21:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more shading on the neck. Breeze whisker  04:35, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Earpink's the same color as her other images, not touching it. 23:05, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg... and darken it a wee bit more. :U 01:34, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (D) ~ Redone
Kay, I'm not feeling my best at the moment. Please tell me anything that's off, because I can barely tell for myself right now. I'd save it for later, but that list needs to be gotten through. 03:28, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think there is too little stripes on the haunch and near the chest area, since more are supposed to be overlapping the pale chest markings. 13:38, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a bit more pink? 19:09, April 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the stripes a little bit, maybe? Breeze whisker  04:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Insaneular (I think), and it needed to match. Comments? 20:09, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken out some stripes. <span style="">04:54, 30, 04, 2012

I think it's my browser, but define the earpink some more. 21:47, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded yesterday I forgot to say it yesterday. And the earpink matches the warrior and apprentice, so I won't change it. 01:09, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to thicken out a few stripes to match. <span style="">06:33, 01, 05, 2012

Blur the ear pink a tiny bit and there's a bit of waste under him. 23:22, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (W) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows. Redone to match the deputy and elder, I believe. Comments? This matches so bad ;.; Yes I know I forgot the tufted ears...I'll add them later. ene  <span style="">21:11, 04 29, 2012

Nice ^^ Define the neck shading. 21:16 Sun Apr 29

Re-uploaded. Tufted ears. -dies- <span style="">22:44, 04 29, 2012

This still needs to match more. Lessen the black and make the tabby pattern match. :/ <span style="">04:46, 30, 04, 2012

Lakeshine (W) ~ Redone
*prepares to be killed* Um comments? 00:23 Mon Apr 30

lighten the shading on the tail -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  00:55, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Mounty, Teldy had this reserved. 0.o 00:56, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

-Sigh- My reservation expired a day ago. 01:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded x'S 01:43 Mon Apr 30

Blur on the chest where the gray meets the white (hope you understand that). And lighten the earpink. 21:57, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (A) - Redone
OA was Dawnfeather with a redo by Splook with the new blanks. He looked more mottled/spotted rather then actually black and white and the shading needed to be darkened. I'm rusty on my black and white cats... Comments? 03:07, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the dorsal whiteness (meaning the white on his back)? 03:41, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Also, I found out black cats with white-tipped tails are actually not as common as you'd think. You don't have to get rid of it, but it'd be nice to see the percentage of black cats with white tipped tails to go down to coincide with how commonly it's seen. Wonderful btw <3  21:40, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I kinda want to keep the white tail-tip. 22:50, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, but blur it on the haunch. Breeze whisker  04:32, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (A) - Redone
So I redid his deputy almost two months ago... -hides- OA was Icethroat with a redo by Mounty with the new blanks. 19:20, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit on ---> side. Or at least lighten the shading there. 21:49, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) - Redone
I personally like this version better. OA was me, at least the latest one was, and I didnt like the stripes, and it just overall looked bad...Comments?<333 01:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes just a bit. Nice job Twee~ 09:48, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Mistfire, and it needed to be redone to match the alt apprentice.

Lighten him up a bit. Cute! <span style="">06:29, 01, 05, 2012

Blur the shading on his chest/belly. cutee. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:51, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The colors itself are fine...it's the shading that was too dark. And I'm not changing the colors, since they came right from the alt apprentice.

Stonefur (W) ~ Tweaked
It needed to be lightened to match the deputy and apprentice. Also, I'm only changing the color, so please don't tell me to blur the shading...OA was MosspathOfSkyClan, with a redo by Roo. Comments? Also, file changes aren't showing yet. I think 04:52, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

It may just be the shading, but make him more gray. :3 <span style="">06:25, 01, 05, 2012

It's just the shading. Comparing the colors, this is the same color as the dep and apprenitce, just with darker shading. It's fine. 14:01, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) ~ Tweaked
He needed a fluffy tail :3 Latest OA was Iceheart22. Changes probably aren't showing. I feel it needs to be floofier... 23:56, May 1, 2012 (UTC)