Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 188

Dapplepaw (VS) (K) - Approved
back at it. 07:09, 3/21/2018

I think the back foot is meant to be gray, if you're basing this off the apprentice. --

Re-uploaded. 07:36, 3/21/2018

Smooth out the shading some? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:53, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 08:08, 3/21/2018

I don't think there should be any white below the <--- eye. 12:24, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

I almost feel like the tail white could be receded a little, in proportion to how much white shows on the apprentice's tail tip

Re-uploaded. 20:54, 3/21/2018

I think the white on --> hind leg should be extended. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 21:54, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

What do you mean, extended? I'm pretty sure the leg wouldn't be visible at this angle. 21:58, 3/21/2018

Like expand the white a bit more I think? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 21:59, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Can you get a redline please? I'm very confused. 22:05, 3/21/2018

With how I have it on the apprentice, I'm not sure the white would be visible. I think it matches as-is.

CBA? 01:27, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

Approved.

Softpaw (VS) (A) - Approved
HELLO

Define the shading depth on both hindlegs and inside --> ear? 16:25, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Define it on the front leg a little? Maybe make the overall shading just a bit deeper too, it's looking good! 23:10, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 8D

Define the shading depth on the chest and stomach? 00:34, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I defined it slightly, but the shading starts to look kinda blotchy/uneven when it's done too much.. I'm guessing it's just the source, because most of the apps with this light source have little depth on the chest and stomach comparatively to others

Could you smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us? 20:03, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? 01:24, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

Approved.