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Conekit (Ki) ~ CBA
This turned out better than I thought. 20:30, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Define the shading, smooth it out, define the shading depth, smudge the patches, smudge the ear pink. 20:38, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Is your light from <-- way? I don't want to be super picky with source and all, but the tail contradicts the light source. Light's from <-- way but the shading shows that it's not, and I think the tail shading should be swapped to the other side.

Reuploaded Thanks! And yes, the shading is from the <--- way. 20:49, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry to persist, but if the shading's from <-- way like you say, wouldn't the shading for the tail be moved to the other side? The way it is now, it contradicts the light source, as just that part says that the light is hitting from the other direction while the rest of it does not.

What? Now I'm confused. You just told me to move it to the other side earlier, and I did. Now are you telling me to move it back? Not meaning to sound rude, but which way does it go? 20:54, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

It's correct now. I was looking at your past upload. The upload history shows that you uploaded twice after your original post, and at the time I commented for the second time, your older revision was still showing. So, sorry about that, as I looked at it when it was uploaded for the second revision, after you commented, but before the change had been made.

Well done :) Second image since the first was approved :) Smooth out the shading on the head near the <--- ear? 21:18, 4/24/2017

Reuploaded Thanks! :) 21:25, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge out the patches more.

Reuploaded 22:52, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

blur/smudge earpink some more.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:08, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Blur shadow on tail – 09:47, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:50, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, it looks really flat. User:Homosneksual/sig 00:43, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:55, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

The way you smoothed the patches looks blotchy. Make sure there are defined spaces between them, and that one side of a patch isn't more blurry than the other, if that makes sense? 23:40, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:05, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

I believe the shading is leaking away from <-- cheek fluff and could you smooth out the ankle markings and face shading please

Reuploaded 04:11, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste all around the head. Also, the shading seems quite blotchy and disconnected, and that it blends into the gray patches so it looks like one big gray patch. 20:44, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:21, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Shading depth was bad so I changed that. Also, before anyone asks, this if supposed to be sharp. 00:24, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs a lil more 00:30, 5/04/2017

Reuploaded 00:37, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad on the back paw, define the shading depth on the head 02:28, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:03, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could stand to be smoothed more on the chest area and head 21:11, 5/05/2017

Reuploaded 22:26, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think shading is leaking a little on the back paw and by the underbelly. Also smooth out the shading more where I pointed out last time as well as the tail 14:31, 5/06/2017

Reuploaded 16:08, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

It's still kind of leaking on the back paw, like by the puff of fur 15:59, 5/07/2017

Reuploaded Did I get it? 16:09, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth head shading a bit?

Reuploaded 20:32, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the chest shading just a tiny bit more 22:52, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded 23:37, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth head shading more

I think what's causing the head shading to look sharp is the gray patch on the top of his head. Perhaps smooth the patch a tad? 02:50, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think you got that part that I was talking about with the leaking back paw shading. It's like right by the belly floof. Also smooth the chest shading more 23:38, 5/09/2017

Reuploaded There's no chest shading. There's a somewhat lighter patch inside of the chest patch. (Confusing, I know) Also, did I get the spot you were talking about? 02:19, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

yis, CBA? 13:26, 5/10/2017

I apologize for breaking your CBA, but the front legs shading seems a little blotchy near the lineart, and there's a very sharp bit of gray here that looks almost unsmoothed at all, and comparative to the rest, it sticks out.

Reuploaded That wasn't shading, it was the ankle patches that are on the front paws, I just forgot to smoothen it out. Anyways, I just got rid of it. 23:40, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Yup that's what I meant. Re-CBA?

Reedwhisker (Rogue) ~ For Approval
very filthy repost, I apologize if I break a rule or anything for this --

Not sure if you are or not, but if not, smooth the shading and define the light. 04:48, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

You aren't breaking a rule, Neon. We do not tell users they cannot repost unless they break the one month rule.

Define the ear pink? 20:20, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried lightening it to contrast against his black fur, so it'd pop out and be more visible --

Does the ear pink match the other images? The pink in the deputy looks lighter than this. 14:56, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the image?

Reuploaded I think it's the light? Also, how do I define it, Spooky? I forgot. --

I don't know how other people do it, but I just erase shading where I want my light-source to be with low opacity set in the eraser, then I smudge/blur it. That might work? -- 20:44, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded did it work??? --

Smooth the shading on the tail? 21:12, 5/05/2017

Reuploaded --

Smoothen out all the shading, but especially on the head. 06:17, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded --

There's a speck of waste by the booty 12:55, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded I found that funnier than I probably should, Snow. --

Lmaoo, can you define the eye depth as well as the light in the eye? 21:51, 5/09/2017

And smooth the head shading a little more and define the light on the back paw/leg farthest from us? 23:39, 5/09/2017

Re-uploaded Fact: I turn my dark cats a dark red when fixing their shading to see it better, and I nearly uploaded red Reedwhisker oml --

Define the light on both the farthest legs. 02:36, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Rushtail (WC) (Star) ~ CBA
Wut have I done? I've gone insane from my mom listening to Beauty and the Beast (It's good but I just want to drown it out with Castle on the Hill cause that's how I like it)

Lighten the shading a bit Rainbowmistake (talk) 00:04, May 4, 2017 (UTC)chat

Can you smooth out the shading a little also? 00:06, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

I can't really see the pupil <span style="">00:19, 5/04/2017

re-up I might just go for a sharp shading style if this doesn't work out. I'm not sure about the pupil because I'm worried about it turning cross-eyed. I'll define it later though.

The base color looks a little too light, and I think the earpink in <-- ear should be lighter since the earpink on the elder image is in shadow, and this ear is not

The tail shading is looking too... little? But anyways just expand it.

I colorpicked...did the elder's OA use highlights? Also what color should I make the earpink?

Can you smooth the shading —  Minkclaw   19:23, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

re-up "I'm on my way..."

Define the light on the tail 22:38, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I'm not exactly happy with this.

Define the pupils a bit, they're sorta hidden by the highlights. 03:23, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail tip and near the base of the tail, smooth the shading some more on the flank and the < leg where it kinda looks too defined? And define the shading depth a little <span style="">21:17, 5/05/2017

re-up Stupid tail shading....I'm going to get to the eyes later.

re-up

There's an unfilled pixel on the <--- paw. 06:15, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail again where I asked earlier. I didn't see any change towards the base of the tail <span style="">16:01, 5/07/2017

re-up It's kinda hard.

I meant the very top where the tail shading is on the very left side of the tail should be light. And define it more on the tail-tip too <span style="">16:17, 5/07/2017

re-up I don't think this did any good, but oh well.

Sorry for comment spamming, but this is too dark to match the elder image. I've provided you with a screenshot and to the right you see the colors I've colorpicked from the lightest parts of the images. The lighter one is what the base should be on this image. <span style="">16:22, 5/07/2017

And it also looks like there's some shading that needs to be smoothed by the < leg's shoulder line <span style="">16:22, 5/07/2017

re-up I'll get to the shading smoothing later. (you're fine snow don't worry ^^)

re-up

Don't forget about the eye comment :P <span style="">12:56, 5/08/2017

What eye comment?

"I can't really see the pupil—Broken_Foot♣Ra Ra Rasputin♣ 00:19, 5/04/2017" & "Define the pupils a bit, they're sorta hidden by the highlights. Dannydismal 03:23, May 5, 2017 (UTC)" <span style="">00:49, 5/09/2017

re-up don't think this looks any better

All you did was add more highlights and the comment was asking to pretty much remove some?? <span style="">23:43, 5/09/2017

The eye closest is fine, alright. The farthest eye, maybe only have like, one highlight so it's not covering the color n pupil. 01:06, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I had two in each corner, that fine?

CBA? <span style="">13:28, 5/10/2017

Strong Pounce (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay let's try this again shall we? —  Minkclaw   13:28, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg farthest from us? Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, May 4, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Re-Ups —  Minkclaw   19:17, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little, and expand the light on the chest. 20:44, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste on the right side of the image and by the paws. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light to < front leg <span style="">14:32, 5/06/2017

Define the tail shading 14:39, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any earpink?

Still working? <span style="">22:53, 5/08/2017

Yes, it hasn't been a week yet. Yes there is ear shading, usually a cat's ear shading with be close to that of the base pelt or the color of their ears. I'll have it uploaded tomorrow. —  Minkclaw   19:52, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Mink, we ask if you're still working after 4 days, and no one asked if there was any ear shading??? <span style="">23:45, 5/09/2017

Winter I think they meant ear pink, not ear shading. 01:04, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I did my apologies and I was aware it was a week, that's what I was always told? —  Minkclaw   13:09, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Its declined after a week, but we ask after 4 days.. <span style="">13:23, 5/10/2017

Ah well my apologies then. —  Minkclaw   16:22, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Deerpaw (TC) (Star)- For evaluation
KatsCandy (talk) 08:37, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

My first helpful hint is to not align your images - as it can mess with the page's formatting. Second, this should be called File:Deerpaw (TC).star.png and there is a fair bit of waste around the image. I would also perhaps recommend getting in contact with the artist of the image you are matching for the file so that everything can match spot on. ^^ 08:41 Fri May 5 2017

Can you clear backround? – 10:15, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the spots, also can you add around Deerpaw (TC) so we can get a link to her page? --

She is long-furred, like charart of appretince – 11:00, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Hey yeah I'm the OA of the apprentice. I used pure white speckles and smudged each slightly, and there's also texture on the other image. The earpink seems off in color, and also, define the eye depth a tad. If you need the file for it, shoot a message on my talk page

Still working? <span style="">12:55, 5/09/2017

Yes I will reupload the edited version soon KatsCandy (talk) 04:01, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. <span style="">21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink <span style="">01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray <span style="">16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Theres waste by the butt <span style="">13:45, 5/09/2017

Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--  22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one

Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall <span style="">23:50, 5/09/2017

Reups --  20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images.

Reups --  02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place <span style="">02:43, 5/11/2017

Leafstar (Alt W.) ~ For Approval
how does one charart 21:12, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the texture a lit'l, and soften the white?

I think the shading is leaking by the belly on the curve of the hind leg <span style="">16:04, 5/07/2017

reuploaded the homework is threatening to drown me why did i leave it until now 23:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white patches? 23:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:23, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to brighten the patches more (try removing the brown on it), and give them a good blur/smudge, they look a little chalky.

Um, I don't think you can really brighten white guys? But maybe smooth the shading and lighten it just a smidge? Maybe that's why everyone's saying to lighten 'em^ <span style="">02:34, 5/09/2017

Yeah it is possible, Broken. I usually duplicate the layer the white is on and adjust the opacity until I get the desired brightness. I'm sure there are other ways, but that's how I normally do it. 03:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Or the dodge tool. :) Is it just me or is the muzzle darker than the rest of the image? Is that shading? 03:59, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the tabby pattern? I think she's meant to have tabby stripes anyway 21:36, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded defined + blurred white patches, got rid of the darker muzzle, and redid the tabby pattern with a thicker brush 21:55, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs and the tail, and define the light on the legs after you define the shading. The shading is also leaking on the < ear, and possibly remove the shading on the front of the chest, as that wouldn't be there in your source. The shading is also leaking along the back of the neck and the back itself, smooth the patch of white on the base of the tail and brighten the white more, it's looking like a milky-cream/white <span style="">23:52, 5/09/2017

Give the stripes more variation and make them curve around the body rather than just flat lines.

reuploaded 00:51, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a little bit, or at least add some depth. 01:56, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

I think you missed a patch of shading on the bum by the base of the tail <span style="">02:44, 5/11/2017

Talonpaw (A) - For Approval
Here we go! --Mustetassu (talk) 09:47, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

This is very good for a first image! This isn't reserved on the table though, so that might be a problem <span style="">09:49, 5/07/2017

Ah, I'm sorry! This is my first time doing this so I'm still learning :') Should I reserve it now or is it too late for that? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 09:55, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Yes, from my knowledge, everyone gets one free pass :)

Alright, I reserved it now! Thanks for the help! :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 10:15, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

i don't think you did, your name's not on the table.

Soften the stripes? I'm so tired I can barely see properly, but expand thr shadng too? The place where you reserve stuff is called http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki:Charart ...I'm gping to sleep now.. <span style="">11:10, 5/07/2017

Aaaa I'm so sorry, I misunderstood! ;___; Now my name is in there. I edited earlier this (http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki:Charart/List) page where I stroke Talonpaw's file from the list. Did I do wrong, or was that meant to be done as well? I'm sorry for messing up like this ;w;' --Official HamilTrash (talk) 11:13, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Silver tabbies should have black stripes; that's what we've done for those who are called just silver, which applies in this case.

Re-uploaded. How does it look now? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 11:35, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

This should be File:Talonpaw.apprentice.png not Apprentice. Can you define the shading depth? <span style="">13:10, 5/07/2017

if it's possible, can you define the white paws? this is nice. 16:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I added the changes requested above, how is it now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:10, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Removed alignment. Don't put "|left" Just click on the photo and hit "more info" and then click on "upload new version" <span style="">17:13, 5/07/2017

Smoothen out the white paws into the silver and maybe make the earpink less neon, and smoothen it out too? 17:17, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth 17:21, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Got it, thanks for the tip Broken_Foot! I added the requested changes above, it was a bit difficult to define the eye depth when the apprentice's eyes are so small but I tried my best. How is it now? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:28, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I don't see changes for the earpink and white paws. Smoothen out the white paws a bit more, and all of the shading. 17:30, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Your welcome :) The image is coming along great! Here's some earpink codes that you might like: 9a3b3b\b28891\e1a7a7 <span style="">17:34, 5/07/2017

Re-uploaded. How is it now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe darken the silver a bit to make it more clear that the front paws are white? Right now they look like the same color as the rest of the kitty

Re-uploaded. I darkened the silver a bit, how does it look now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 03:30, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you make the nose pink less purple-ish? 03:45, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed it! :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 03:53, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the legs, shoulder, and tail areas? It seems like there's too little <span style="">13:04, 5/08/2017

Imo, I think the stripes look more dark gray than black. I keep looking at Shiningheart, Reed Tail, and other silver tabbies and the stripes here don't look dark enough to be black. Darken them more? 16:58, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

I think this is the range of images that the shading tint makes it look a completely different color that throws off the image, and this seems to be the case. I know shading tint is artists choice but can you make it something other than a light blue? <span style="">18:34, 5/08/2017

I don't see how it's throwing it off at all. if anything the base just needs to be lightened a bit more, since it looks a bit more pale grey than silver. 18:39, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

To me with the shading it kinda looks like a pale blue gray color <span style="">20:39, 5/08/2017

Gonna have to agree with Snow on this one^ It does seem like it's pale blue <span style="">01:26, 5/09/2017

The shading was fine until they darkened the base. So, if they just lighten the base again, it should fix the problem. 03:50, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Drizzle (W) ~ For Approval
I may need to define texture

Yeah, you probalby should. Also,smudge the gray some more. 23:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded tomorrow I'll try to make earpink match better

Would you like the file for the kit? <span style="">03:15, 5/08/2017

Some things: the white that is in that stripe down the middle should widen out as ii goes --> way a little more, like on the kit image. It should also be a little wider in proportion on the leg part as well, because of how wide it seems on the ES, and the kit blank is pretty small so it would account to that. The ES image (I'm fairly sure) shows 4 white paws. The second gray stripe on the tail shouldn't go all the way across - as seen on both other images, and also, I think the white chest dips down a teensy bit too dar. Then, the facial white has a bit more of a defined shape - and it'd stretch in a thinner part a few more pixels on the forehead, like the others. Also you might want to double check if there can be those three white spots as shown on the lower half of the body. Ik it's from differing angles, but the one nearer to the leg wouldn't because of the ES, and the one <-- way isn't visible on the kit, unless it's hidden by shading, idk. Sorry for the long comment

Also the white and the texture should be a lot smoother to match the kit, as it was the first in the set. Also define the texture on the white. <span style="">12:48, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded Alrighty so I widened the white on the front leg and flank, fixed the tail, I tried to define the shape of the white on the face, receded white chest a bit, smoothed white and texture, now the things I have issues with: So about the back paws, I didn't make them white because on the Early Settler it's showing the other sides of the paws and they aren't solid white, they just have little white spots, I didn't want to stretch the white on the forehead because on the kit it barely shows it going above the eyes. Then the white spots I added, I don't think any of the spots I added are visible on the kit or the Early Settler, but the kit blank is tiny and weird so maybe I'm wrong. I'll define texture on the white later, after I get the file

The back paw closest to us gets white on it, according to the kit image. <span style="">20:49, 5/08/2017

Also in regards to the es image, it looks like the oa has white on both paws, but it doesnt look like the whole paw because of the leg shading on the other leg. So in that case, white is needed on both paws <span style="">20:51, 5/08/2017 '''

Reuploaded

Smooth shading on the haunch a little? <span style="">13:30, 5/10/2017

Reuploaded

Seedpelt (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
ErmineGlow (talk) 00:02, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups got rid of some waste. ErmineGlow (talk) 00:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define the shading depth some. 00:14, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth 00:36, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle shading. 01:13, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the tail, and it looks like you erased some of the lineart around the whiskers, paws, chin, and tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 02:41, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more. It should be more of a gradient. 11:14, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

You have very odd smudges in your shading that conflict with the pattern, mind fixing that? <span style="">12:49, 5/08/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:02, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups For some reason the changes to the shading didn't appear, so I tried again. Me thinks it is better now. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:05, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">21:06, 5/08/2017

Reups Me terrible at shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a lot 21:52, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Ermine, what tool are you using for smoothing the shading? Because it kind of looks like the burn tool, and that's not a good tool to use. If you have a watercolor tool, I'd advise using that, or a blur tool in general. Are you using a mouse or a tablet? <span style="">23:03, 5/08/2017

I used the paint tool for the darkest part of the shading that follows the lineart, then the lighter parts were made by either the paint tool on a low opacity or the burn tool. I am using a mouse. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:55, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

The burn tool is mostly good for making shading, not smoothing it. Also, there's a patch of shading missing on the ---> paw, sorry if that was said already. 03:03, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Recede the white on the cheek. On the warrior, the white is lower below the eye so there's more brown space there than on here. Also, I think the white above the nose should be smudged a bit more upwards to match the warrior  03:40, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:09, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste on the upper part of the tail. --

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:17, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a lot more, it's all over the place. And define the light on the legs <span style="">23:54, 5/09/2017

Define the light everywhere actually 02:05, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the face, it seems in shadow. --Streamdapple (talk) 10:47, May 10, 2017 (UTC)Streamdapple

Also, can you smooth out the shading overall, especially the body? Also, what program is this, again? --

Btw this should be for evaluation, as you never had an image approved <span style="">13:32, 5/10/2017

Getting an image approved is not the requirement. Knowing the basics is. The heading will stay at for approval.

Reups I used the blur and smudge tool to try and smooth out the shading, and Neon, I am using Pixlr ErmineGlow (talk) 21:09, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you try Gaussian blurring? It is your choice, I suppose, but it would make the shading more realistic. Just make a new layer, paint over where you want to shade. Then go to the tab "Filter" and select Gaussian Blur. Choose your blurring rate and you're done. --  22:26, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Not sure if it looks any different ErmineGlow (talk) 22:42, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading some more. Branchwing (talk) 01:19, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (W) - For Approval
She looks so much better with the ES blank :| All layers/colors from the other images. <span style="">00:18 Mon May 8

Can you smooth out that one spot on the tail tip? (unless you'd rather not because it's part of your style)

Define the ear pink 02:33, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Looks like the yellow is a little darker than on the Early Settler

Sun got the colors from the other images though? Given that she's also the OA of the kit and early settler, I would think that Sun got the colors directly from the other files. (not the alt, the regular ES)

Everything matches perfectly though? I cannot mess with the ear pink. This is the exact color and way it was smudged as the other images. And even the opacity on all the layers is the exact same, so there is no difference. The only difference is light source. <span style="">12:45 Mon May 8

Can you smooth the shading a little tiny bit on the legs/paws? <span style="">13:08, 5/08/2017

I did it, just haven't had the internet access to email it to my phone so I can upload. Things are really rough again in my life. I'm sorry I haven't gotten around to it. 😞 <span style="">20:56 Wed May 10

Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading <span style="">13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more <span style="">18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Clover (ES) (W) ~ For Approval
moustache kitty. 23:39, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the front leg shading a bit? I love this lol Rainbowmistake (talk) 23:53, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Um, I can see the shading on both the front legs just fine? <span style="">02:02, 5/10/2017

I mostly meant the farthest front paw Rainbowmistake (talk) 02:53, May 10, 2017 (UTC)chat

reuploaded 02:59, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I love your chararts so much :^O Smooth that line of muzzle shading just a tad? 03:22, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

If you can, define the ear pink a bit. Broken, please don't say "it's fine." :/ 04:18, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded you're probably the only one who does lul 16:45, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Flower (Ro) - For Approval
07:01, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth shading a little on the main body? <span style="">13:33, 5/10/2017

Re-uploaded 21:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink 22:30, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Pink Eyes (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 18:00, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? Also, I'm sure the other images have texture. Cute^ <span style="">18:03, 5/10/2017

Reuploaded. I'm going to hold off on the texture, as I can't tell if it is actually texture or just the shading; If it's the latter, I'm not required to match it. 18:19, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

it looks like texture to me. 18:20, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Its texture. Also Bluestar, why did you change Brokens reservation??? That is a big no-no.. :/ im going to have to ask skye about this. <span style="">18:25, 5/10/2017

Reuploaded. Like I said, it was an accident. I didn't realize editing from the view changes page would revert any edits made in between. I know it now, so I won't do it again. 18:33, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth on the lower part of the haunch/backside?

Reuploaded. 22:15, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the haunch and define the light on the hind legs. 23:29, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the flank shading 23:30, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:40, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the neck/face. 02:01, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

CAn you lessen some of the shading on the neck/muzzle area? <span style="">02:30, 5/11/2017

Reuploaded. I used this exact same amount of head shading on Robinwing's warrior image, so I'd rather not if I don't have to. If others agree, though, I'll change it. 02:38, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Gooseberry (W) ~ For Approval
I tried... 19:34, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I wasn't sure if it was shading or not, but on the queen, isn't there texture? This is very nice <span style="">19:38, 5/10/2017

I don't think it's texture?? Idk. Maybe define the ear pink and define the shading on both farthest legs. 22:29, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's no texture =) but I think the stripes could be softer and more broken up, so try smudging it a bit more? This is so adorabbb <3333

Reed Tail (W) - For Approval
I love doing his pictures 19:55, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth just a smidge? Pretty! <span style="">20:11, 5/10/2017

Wishkit (Kit) - For Approval
I did like 3 chararts while my boy leafy was being approved, but I like this one the best. All colors from other images, and I tried my best to match the stripes with this position. 20:20, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ear pink's a tad lighter on the other image - it's just under shading there, but this looks darker overall than the earpink on the star's --> ear. Also, I think there'd be a smidge of shading here on the <-- side with your source, just so that whole side isn't flat.

reups Is this looking more like the star's ear pink? 20:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

The nose and earpink hex are a76d52, if you need that. Nice job Danny!

reups Thank you! (Okay, the ear pink should now be absolutely 100% accurate) 23:29, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (W) - For Approval
These blanks are a little smaller than I'm use to 21:34 10 May 2017

Define the shading depth 21:47, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad, and also I can see you know what you're doing, so this can be 'For Approval'.

Pricklekit (WC) (Ki) - For Evalution
My first image posted here... Hope you like it! Branchwing (talk) 22:23, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, define the shading depth, this needs a black tipped nose, define the light on the ---> front leg. Nice! 22:28, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think the black-tipped nose would be visible on this blank, as assuming that it's on the bridge of the nose is an assumption, and we don't make those here. <span style="">22:52, 5/10/2017

no it's not? dew nose has the exact same thing except with white. 23:33, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added the black tipped nose, considering the comment about Dew Nose. Also made her nose a little lighter to differentiate the tipped nose and the actual nose a little bit better, they would have been nearly the same color if I didn't. Hopefully I defined the shading enough. Branchwing (talk) 00:41, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! :) Smooth out shading depth a tad? 00:48, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Mosspaw (SC)(Ki) ~ For Approval
This is the first time trying out smudged shading. Ugly. This was a really quick job because I was very busy today. Wanted to do something basic, and was dying to do a kit <span style="">23:54, 5/10/2017

Ik it's a different angle, but at least a few pixels of that brown tail patch we see on the star should be visible.

I don't think it would be. I made the brown patch so it would be at an angle, and I'm pretty sure it wouldn't be visible on this blank's angle. But if others do agree I'll change it <span style="">00:04, 5/11/2017

I see your perspective, but it looks as if the patch curves under the tail, so I believe a tiny bit would be visible on the underside of the tail. Also, smooth the head shading a tad. 00:06, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I know the pixels aren't that prominent, but as said above, I only added a little bit of pixels. Also, I know the brown looks green-brown, because that was when I didn't know it did(on the star). So don't comment about that, please. <span style="">00:11, 5/11/2017

Where is the brown there, though? As seen in your latest upload from up close, there is pure white on the bottom of the tail, unless I'm being really really dumb here, you didn't add any brown there.

I added the brown. I don't want it to be very prominent because personally, I don't think it would be visible. The brown is there, but it just blends in with the shading a wee bit because I only added about 3-4 pixels and smudged them lightly :/ <span style="">00:33, 5/11/2017

No like, I meant the underside of the tail. There isn't shading on the underside of the tail. As you can see on the screencap, the brown needs to be on the underside of the tail, not the topside like you have it. That's what I'm referring to, as you can see the underside is /very/ clearly white.

Re-uploaded! I need to pay attention more <span style="">01:47, 5/11/2017

Can you...define that it's part of the pattern and brown? It just looks like an odd patch of shading to me <span style="">02:29, 5/11/2017

Snail Shell (W) ~ For Approval
I took the colors from the es version I did, back when that was in use

As I said when the ES was up, the pattern is more flecked-like than you have it. I based his kit image off of Ashfur, and this really doesn't match all too well. I know it's a small blank, but... idk. They're meant to be small, round ones. These are way too big.