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Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
I seem to attract solid gray chararts. This definitely isn't my best. Comments? OA was Echomist. Just a shading tweak. 20:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

What needed to be done, and who was the OA? Also, define the ear pink. 21:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:51, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 02:04, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. I'll have it reuploaded by tomorrow. I was in Florida over the weekend. 22:21, March 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the haunch highlight. 23:55, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 07:32, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Redstar (L) - Redone
Stripes needed to be redone <3 OA was Hawktalon, with a redo by Cloudy, and a tweak by moi. 02:52, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Add some stripes on this <--- flank and some shading at the bottom please! 03:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Ah, to see such a crappy image redone. It fills my heart with joy~ 8D 03:29, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the white muzzle and paws. False reference :3 03:32, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:05, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful~ 8D 20:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. (SO BEAUTIFUL~) Sunny  frost  22:07, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit? c: Sky Seedlit Proxy 22:43, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky, I refuse to thicken the stripes. They're thin and I like them c: 04:24, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink <3  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 15:39, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit dark for a reddish cat...maybe lighten it or use a lighter color, like a light orange? 21:04, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:44, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading. 19:22, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading looks fine. Can you define the earpink just a tiny bit more, though? 19:26, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think it's a little too dark. And I noticed that while most of the shading is tinted red, the leg shading is tinted grey. Fix that along with the haunch shading? 02:03, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:55, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more. 21:22, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not. 02:21, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Then define the tail stripes. 21:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:51, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a tad greenish...Could you fix that? This is lovely, Loonie! 21:21, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:40, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger. 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Not to be very picky, and this might just be me, but the shading is a little bit to dark overall. Could you just lighten it up? Also blur the tail shading too. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  20:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think this might be as ginger as it will get.. x3 But eh. 03:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight/lighter part/thing a bit bigger? 8D Sky Gatlocke 11:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Don't hate me, but she still looks like a light-brown cat 00:18, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmkay, I'll try my best, I'll upload soon x3 *doesn't hate you* 02:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.)  21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over C:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 21:26, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I attempted to match it to the warrior image's pattern. Don't look at it, it's ugly D:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 22:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <3 Lovely Elo 22:03 Sun Mar 4

Blur it, too. 22:32, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) - Tweaked
Me gusta :P OAs were Night Shine with a redo by that nerd Ivystripe. Her stripes were unrealistic. I did deleted those off my .xcf file and made brand-spanking new ones! 19:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

<333 Epical. Define the earpink. 19:54, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank ya kindly ^^ 20:00, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a tad? 20:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink, it's far too dark.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    00:55, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Bootiful Ivy! <3 Tone down the "highlights" or such/blur the shading at the edges, mainly the chest and haunch. 01:15, 03, 03, 2012

Sorry Sunny, but I think the earpink looks okay. :3 04:08, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was just told to define the earpink so I'm not touching it  23:45, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

At least blur the edges of it so it doesn't look so sharp edged, Ivy. _-_ 17:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Would this need a greying muzzle, or does that just apply to the alt? Sky Gatlocke  04:45, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I think it depends on when she was described with the muzzle. If it's before the alt, then yes, I'd think so. If it's after she was mistakenly described, then I'd say no. 22:31, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

She was described with the gray muzzle at the exact moment of the alt, so it only applies to that. This shouldn't have one. 00:15, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

ReuploadedYep, Bluefur had noticed the dark brown she-cat's muzzle turning gray with age. I don't see why those don't count as alts but that's just me XD  05:11, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match the apprentice and warrior images. OA was Echomist. I did the apprentice one, so I already know the style and the opacity for all the layers and all that, so this wasn't too hard. 00:46, 04, 03, 2012

Lighten the shading a tad. 19:07, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:39, 05, 03, 2012

Tallstar (L) ~ Redone
I might have gone a little over board on the patches o3o OAs were Yai-Girl, Shimmerpool and tweaks by Ivy and Shelly. Comments? 04:42 Sun Mar 4

Oh, dear lord. You expect me to match /that/? Can you dumb it down just a little bit? You kinda went a little over the top...but I /do/ like it. 8D 04:43, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dear god, Mountainheart! You've really outdone yourself this time... Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more on his shaded ear. 04:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye, Sir! Thank you so much 8D I tried blurring the patches but it looked really bad x.x I'd rather not change them. 05:01 Sun Mar 4

Eh, that's fine. What matters is that you tried. xD 05:05, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

* Smacks with jandal* Y U SO GOOD *cough* Anyway, define the neck shading? c: Sky Gatlocke 11:10, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Sky <33 15:50 Sun Mar 4

Darken the shading on his tailtip, it looks pure white. Lovely <33  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 17:24, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Thank you Elo 18:45 Sun Mar 4


 * gasps* How do you do that...? Since the white is furry, do you mind making the black furry too? 21:35, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh my...Mountain that is beautiful!!!!! Or should I say Handsome? =P Could you define the shading? 03:37, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

In the words of the forever-awesome Shelly: "Darken the gray to black and go easy on the patches. He looks mottled now and he hasn't ever been described as such." She sends that to Mounty with love c: 03:58, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8DDD Thank you guys so much <333 I tried making him fury the same way I made the chest but it was incredibly hard to see so I made it the same way I made Mousefur. I darkened it but I'd rather not change the patched because I like the way they look :3 04:10 Tue Mar 6

Tallpoppy (W) ~ Redone
W00t join.me 8D OAs were Bramble and Flamingomom3 I think. Comments? 06:34 Sun Mar 4

kay so, let's get this straight. words cannot describe how amazing this is. just, fyi. k? all I see is that you need to define the earpink, then we need to have my funeral. 07:38, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think you could lighten up the tail shading a tad, but seriously, bloody perfect Sky Gatlocke 11:11, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8DDD Thank you so much 15:49 Sun Mar 4

My my my, O.o wow...a-m-a-z-i-n-g. All I can say is define the tail stripes a tad...20:54, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Cinder <33 21:26 Sun Mar 4

* Drops jaw in horror and amazment* Really, your chararts are so good, they're scaring me. I have no idea how you do it... Maybe slightly blur the earpink at the edges, other than that, perfect. 05:33, 05, 03, 2012

Re-uploaded 8D Thank you DJ <3 05:49 Mon Mar 5

Oh, can ya blur the neck shading some? (Dude, knives everywhere) Sky Gatlocke  06:45, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded You better listen to me now >:} 14:57 Tue Mar 6

Can choo blur the heck shading just a leetle bit more? Other then that, I honestly see nothing wrong. (Scary knives~) 03:55, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Brightsky (Q) ~ Redone
She was fun to make... ginger cats rock. 8D 03:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I thought the file name said queer xD Blur the shading. Sky Gatlocke 03:30, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little? I still say this is Brightheart is her past life <3  03:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

And define the eye colour. 17:57, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Finchstar (L) - Redone
Too lazy to list why it was redone. XD Check the tweak nominations page. OA was Nightfall101. Changes aren't showing. I had two versions of these, so if you guys want to see the other, I can upload it and you can just compare the archives. Comments? 00:11, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Show us the other version. 00:41, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Well reuploaded so you could see it, but you can't actually see it yet.... XD *slaps wiki lag* Mayb I'll put up the two archives side by side 00:57, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

There. The one on the left is the one people on chat seem to like more, but I can't decide. 00:58, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

I like the one on the left <33333333 00:59 Tue Mar 6

The left one~ 02:05, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Left one it is. o3o Now, actual comments for improvement? XD 02:54, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the whites parts looks kinda reddish-brown. Maybe make a separate layer of shading for the paws and chest and shade with black/gray? Just my opinion. Maybe smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit? 03:40, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Q) - Tweak
OAs were me and Sandstar12. Reason being unrealistic stripes. To be honest, I raged when I tried to copy my own stripes on her tail. So sorry if some look out of place because I kind of gave up XD 05:09, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur where the 'highlights' meet the shading on the belly. 8D Lovely~ 20:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on her haunch a bit. This is pretty... ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  00:02, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Shadowshine, and it needed to match the other images. All colors are from the kittypet, so I'm not changing them. 05:53, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

This is so cute! Can you define the earpink and lighten the shadings a little? ,15:07,March 6,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading just a tad. 20:15, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:34, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (W) - Redone
Because stripes. OA was Dawnfeather with a redo by me and a tweak by Leafstorm. Everything is the exact same as his deputy except the tail. 01:55, March 7, 2012 (UTC)