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Mousefang~Silver Nomination
Well, I made her elder charart, and I figured I might as well fix up her page. Comments? River pelt Happy Halloween! 22:30, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

All of the sections could be expanded a bit more. Is there any more information to be found? Can you find one more quote?-- 22:49, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Not any good quotes, she only says like three quotes total, but the third one isn't good. All of her sections are filled up as far as they can go, I've checked every book. River pelt Happy Halloween! 00:25, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

If that is all that can be added, then it looks fine. 23:54, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. 05:14, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. =) 17:46, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

The main quote needs punctuation at the end XD, but otherwise, nice! Supporting :D 19:18, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed it. Thanks for the heads up, Midnitesky! River pelt Happy Halloween! 19:36, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

No problem. ;) I also expanded Battles of the Clans a bit more for you; I hope you don't mind! 19:43, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

All the history looks good. I fixed a problem with Oakstep as her apprentice. The only citation provided, was on Firestar's Quest, pg 189, but it doesn't verify that he was Mousefang's apprentice, so I removed it. 13:30, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, thanks Midnitesky and Whitestorm! River pelt Happy Halloween!

14:12, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before vote? 23:38, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Vote is up. 01:15, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Mistystar - Silver Nomination
I think her article looks really good! 19:57, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets and Sunset could be smoothed out and shortened. 20:03, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Rising Storm, Midnight, Twilight, and Dark River could also be expanded if possible. Actually most of her history could be expanded. River pelt Happy Halloween! 22:37, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

I've expanded A Dangerous Path and Moonrise by adding a few details that were left out; I'll work on the rest later. Unfortunately, Mistystar doesn't appear in Rising Storm much so I'll take a look at the other books you've listed, Riverpelt. :) 00:33, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Rising Storm, All of NP, minus Sunset, The Sight, and Cats of the Clans could all be expanded. Also, she needs another quote. 00:42, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Moonrise, Dawn, Starlight, and Twilight to the best I could (I edited when I wasn't logged in :P); I'll get to work on Midnight, The Sight, and CotC later. Thanks for the suggestions, Whitestorm! 01:11, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Rising Storm, A Dangerous Path, The Darkest Hour, all of the NP section, and CotC. 02:48, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I've expanded The Darkest Hour (a LOT), and CotC, plus I've added 2 quotes (one of which I really like, "I'll always be grateful for what you did, but I'm a RiverClan cat at heart"). Please note, that because I do not own Rising Storm or A Dangerous Path, I cannot expand them anymore. I've checked the cliffnotes and I've gone to Borders a few times to polish up things, but I simply can't find anything else. I'll get to work on Midnight and the Sight now, but if anyone else can help me, it will be greatly appreciated. Also, please, do not repeat things that other users have said, because I am working on it (Ex: NP=Midnight and the other books in that series; please do not repeat that). Thanks, 18:55, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Rising Storm and A Dangerous Path for you Midnitesky. River pelt Happy Halloween! 21:38, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Riverpelt, that helped! ^-^ Midnitesky 22:04, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Unfortunately, I can't expand The Sight, but I've expanded Midnight :) 20:17, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, Midnite. I can see you have worked really hard on this. Excellent Work! :) Anyways, the part in Moonrise when Reedpaw falls into the river could be expanded. Also, I think she was seen more in Dark River. Besides that, it looks great! 21:17, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks ^-^ I'll dig into the Cliffnotes and borrow some books from my library to polish it up a bit. 00:05, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Moonrise expanded (thanks to my library book). :) I'll get to work on Dark River now. 19:13, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darn it, the library doesn't have Dark River! :( If anybody else can expand it, that would be appreciated, but I'll try my best to scour for a copy. :) 20:32, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded it. I believe hose are the only two significant appearances she made. 01:26, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I could have sworn she appeared more in Dark River. 02:03, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Frostheart ;) 19:07, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. I'm sure. I recently re-read Dark River. 02:05, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, then it looks fine. 13:32, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before the vote? 22:08, November 1, 2010 (UTC)

Vote is up. 21:20, November 2, 2010 (UTC) b

Swallowflight - Silver Nomination
How does he look? 01:47, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed some grammar mistakes. He looks great. :) 02:46, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Can any quotes be added? 11:01, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, probably. I can work on it later tonight. 20:54, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I added a quote and a main quote. 21:35, October 24, 2010 (UTC)\

That looks better. 13:33, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before vote? 01:18, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Vote is up. 23:42, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Fallensnow - Silver Nomination
I think the article looks good for silver. 20:59, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good since Fallensnow is mentioned in like 2 pages. XD 21:11, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, her article does look awesome-considering she appeared like one time and has nearly no part at all xD 23:59, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I support. Great job, Oblivion! River pelt Happy Halloween! 04:52, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

We are currently deciding if characters that never even appeared in the series, should be granted silver status. This will be stalled for the time being. Sorry, 20:59, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for the delayment. This nomination can be resumed. 03:33, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before the vote? 21:26, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Vote is up. 01:00, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sunpelt - Silver Nomination
Her article looks pretty good for a minor character. 21:07, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm supporting. Except, we don't know if Sunpelt is a tom or a she-cat xD 21:28, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I support as well. =) River pelt Happy Halloween! 04:54, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. 15:21, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

We are currently discussing if characters that never even appeared in the series, should be granted silver status. This will be stalled for the time being. Sorry, 21:02, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay. This nomination can be resumed now. 03:39, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before vote? 00:57, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfur - Silver Nomination
His article looks good. Comments? 05:09, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

He needs a couple quotes, and one of them has to be a main quote. River pelt Happy Halloween! 14:49, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Battles of the Clans could be expanded: maybe into paragraphs. 15:20, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Added quotes and I'll get on the Battle of the Clans part. 15:22, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Done. 16:07, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed some grammar mistakes. Supporting =) 21:50, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Can the history be expanded anymore? Also, find another quote. 01:33, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Done 02:27, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. Supporting. 20:18, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Good job, Frostheart! =) River pelt Happy Halloween! 23:27, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

So...anything to do? XD 03:54, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Duststar - Silver Nomination
Not that there's much to his article. xD 20:43, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Needs a citation for being a tom, and more quotes need to be added. 20:56, October 25, 2010 (UTC)


 * Do they really need citations for being a certain gender? If they don't have a description, I don't think a reference is needed :\ 20:57, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

All character article should have a reference for the gender, whether or not they have a description. Sorry if I sound bossy, but that's the way it is. :) 21:08, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Got the reference! You could tell Duststar was a tom because there were alot of "him" and "his" in there. XD River pelt Happy Halloween! 23:26, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Whew, you're a fast one for getting references, Riverpelt! Thanks :) I'll try to get Code of the Clans from the library to dig for a quote. 00:04, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I got Code of the Clans from the library (yay!) and I added a quote. 19:14, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Can another quote be added? I know he is a pretty minor character. 22:51, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... Well, I'll search for a good quote, but I don't know...:/ 00:20, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think CotC can be expanded, I honestly haven't read it in awhile, but I'm pretty sure he's seen more than that. 03:55, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, Duststar is only seen in that section of CotC, to my knowledge, but none the less, I've tried my best to expand it. Although I'm out of quotes. He did say "A truce?", but that's basically useless to the article. :P 20:30, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

The CotC section looks better now. :) I can't see anything wrong except for maybe the quote. XD 01:23, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'll have to look for a good quote... Better get to work! ;) 19:09, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Humph, I can't find anything good.... I'll keep searching, though. 00:56, November 1, 2010 (UTC)

Bingo! I got two really good ones! However, none of the two were actually said by Duststar so I haven't added it to his article yet, but they were both said to him, so here they are:


 * "Clan above all else. It makes sense to me." --Whitestar, Code of the Clans, Pg.16

Maybe I should just put them on those leaders' pages; I don't know. What do you guys think? Midnitesky (Talk)
 * "But from now on, each Clan stands-and fights-alone." --Emberstar, Code of the Clans, Pg.16

Is there any more dialogue to be added to either one of those? Like, something else that Duststar said right before that or after. If not, I don't think those two should be added to his article. 21:12, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

I believe Midnitesky meant to put them on Emberstar's and Whitestar's articles, if they don't belong to Duststar. If that hopefully made sense ;) 14:40, November 3, 2010 (UTC)

That's exactly what I meant; thanks Frostheart! :) And for your question, Whitestorm, Duststar did say something before that, like as in a discussion between the leaders of the Clans, so should I still put them on Duststar's article, or should I put them on Emberstar and Whitestar's articles? Because although Duststar never said anything big in the conversation, he did have a part in it. 19:08, November 3, 2010 (UTC)

Well, if anything he said shows any of his personality, add it. Although, from what you said, it doesn't sound like it did. Anyways, do whatever you want, I trust your judgement. :) 02:17, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Whitestorm! ^ ^ I think I'm going to add those 2 quotes to their characters' pages. Although there's nothing left for Duststar now XD. 22:05, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well, if no more quotes can be found, then his article is complete. 01:06, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleclaw - Gold Nomination
I know Brambleclaw needs a lot of work, but I'm excited to do it. :) Comments and criticism, please. 14:32, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Aww man! I was going to put Brambleclaw up for gold too! Just kidding! XD I was going to, but I'll definetely help you out Frostheart. =D You just have to expand some of his NP history, Outcast, The Sight, Eclipse and Long Shadows. River pelt Happy Halloween! 21:11, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Riverpelt. :) And I was going to expand that later tonight, since I don't have anything to do tonight. :) 21:25, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Expanded Outcast, it has some like...grammar issues, XD But I'll fix that later on. :) 00:20, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

If it is to be gold, all most all of the history should be expanded. 02:05, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I think Brambleclaw looks really good! I can see you've been working very hard on this ;) Just expand New Prophecy and a little bit of Power of Three and I think it's nearly gold quality! :) 19:13, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Outcast, Midnight, fixed Brightspirit's Mercy, expanded Dark River, and Moonrise. :) I'll get on the rest! -zooms off like awesomeness- 00:54, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded The Sight. But I cannot expand Eclipse, since he was..in it like..2..3 times? XD And I cannot expand Long Shadows, either. Since mostly, he was just organizing patrols all the time. So I believe that is all of it, but I'll get on the other sections that I think could need expansion. 01:12, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Dawn needs to be expanded as well as Fading Echoes-- 01:45, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Expanded Dawn. Fading Echoes can't be expanded. 02:29, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

If he is to be gold, all of NP should be expanded. Also, even though he only appeared once in Fading Echoes, that one appearance can be expanded. 13:33, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Midnight a ton, but it might be too much..XD I'll expand all of them like that, if they need summarizing, I can do that. Also, they may hold grammar mistakes, but I always get to that after expanding. 15:06, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded all of NP except for Sunset, which I'll do now. By the way, Midnight and Starlight are typically longer than the others in NP because he is seen more in it. 20:15, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Expanded everything. :) Hopefully its good. XD 03:16, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

He needs citations for his description. 15:08, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Added citations. 15:13, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Rising Storm and Eclispe could be expanded some more. 15:57, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

actually, scratch Eclispe. Just Rising Storm I guess. 16:03, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Done. :) 16:06, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Rising Storm's grammar could be smoothed out a bit. 17:31, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Moonrise could be expanded to show more of their time with the Tribe, and Dawn could be expanded, about how the Clans were suffering when Squirrelflight and Bramblclaw returned home. Also, Fading Echoes could still be expanded. 17:33, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed Rising Storm. I'll get to the expanding. 17:35, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Done. 18:09, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Looks really nice, congrats to all people working on it. :) Midnight still needs some expansion (the description of the journey) in my opinion. Also, the sections should be in chronological order, i.e. Original - FQ - New Prophecy, instead of starting with FQ. 20:24, October 31, 2010 (UTC)


 * Helix, the super editions come first, don't they? 20:25, October 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I think they do. Anyways, I'll expand Midnight. 20:40, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Expanded it. 21:04, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me, supporting-- 23:31, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, Frostheart, you've been working really hard on this! Supporting! ^ ^ 00:57, November 1, 2010 (UTC)

He looks amazing, Frostheart! Great job! I'm definetely supporting! River pelt Happy Halloween! 19:25, November 1, 2010 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. 01:35, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe~Gold Nomination
I just figured I'd put him up now, but I know that there is alot to fix. So any books that need fixing? River pelt Happy Halloween! 14:11, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can't say that most of the books need expansion, since if they did, I would have probably expanded them during the time when I had the silver nom. XD Maybe fix the grammar mistakes? There is a few, but not a whole lot. Maybe the Warriors Refuge section could be expanded..? 14:46, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Riverpelt, I am not just picking on you, because I have seen a few other users do this as well. Please do not nominate a character if you know that the article still needs to be fixed, because it wastes space on the talk page. Also. this article was just very recently granted silver status, so it would not be a very good idea to grant it Gold this soon. 18:02, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry Whitestorm! I had a feeling I should've fixed his page up first! If you all want, it will be fine with me if you archive it. River pelt Happy Halloween! 19:13, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

No, I have no problem with this being up. I was just reminding you for future reference. However, I still stand by my point that he was recently granted silve, so it might be a bad idea to give the article Gold already. 21:24, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

If you think it's a bad idea, then you can get rid of it if you wish, Whitestorm. River pelt Happy Halloween! 23:55, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I am not going to get rid of it, as my opinion is not the only one which matters, and some other users might want to give their input as well. 17:31, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then Whitestorm. I promise you this won't happen again. River pelt Happy Halloween! 19:23, November 1, 2010 (UTC)

So, comments, anyone? River pelt Happy Halloween! 20:38, November 3, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I just realized how awesome a Gold article needs to be. XD So basically everything could need expanding. 23:40, November 3, 2010 (UTC)

Leaving
Hey, I know i said I may come back, but I may not anymore. sorry! I thought deep about it and it's best to not leave an empty name on the front page. I may rejoin over the summer, if it's okay. I'm super busy. ya know how school is... anyway, thanks for letting me join and i wish every body happy reading and a good Thanksgiving! -- 20:39, November 1, 2010 (UTC)

I can understand what you are going through. I will remove you momentarily. Whenever you wish to join back, you will always be welcomed. :) Goodbye, for now. 00:43, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Goodbye, Honeyrose. I know that you made quite a few nominations in the past, and helped out with character articles a lot. That was greatly appreciated. Like Moonflight said, you be welcomed back anytime. 21:14, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Leaving
Latley I have been very busy with other things obtaining to life struggles, im sad to say that I have decided to leave PC. I feel that I cant contribute as much anymore, I also feel that I belong in PCA. Theres no need for an extra name on the list, Good Bye PC members. 00:05, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'll remove you in a bit. I haven't forgotten how you helped me gain my position in PC. I will miss you. See you around. :) 00:41, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Goodbye Shadowshine. Thank you for all your hard work to character articles and to this project. I hope I will see you again soon. 21:15, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

Fallowfern - Silver Nomination
I added all of the times she was mentioned. She has quotes and citations for everything. Comments?-- 23:51, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good. Supporting. 00:06, November 3, 2010 (UTC)

Looks okay. 02:15, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

Emberstar - Silver Nomination
I added a main quote, expanded the CotC history, and got a reference for his gender. Comments? 22:10, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

I know he's a really minor character, but could you maybe find another quote? Other than that, it's good. 22:16, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

Everything he says is really minor, or doesn't really portray his character well. 21:40, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Dove's Wing - Silver Nomination
This is my first nomination and I think that for such a small character Dove's Wing's page is as expanded as it can be. Comments? Spottedpool76 23:52, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

Um, Spottedpool, Dove's Wing already is a Silver Grade article. It says so on the Project:Characters Page and Dove's Wing's talk page. Have you checked? :) 23:57, November 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oh... oops my bad. sorry I didn't notice that. Thanks for pointing that out. Spottedpool76 00:18, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Fish Leap - Silver Nomination
Okay, I checked and then double checked and Fish Leap's page is currently marked bronze. I've done some editing to it and I think it is ready for silver. Comments? --Spottedpool76 01:07, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

It needs some quotes that show personality. I'm sure Long Shadows can be expanded, too. 01:11, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try. Spottedpool76 01:14, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

I added alot but I'll have another look. Did I miss anything? --15:08, November 5, 2010 (UTC)Spottedpool76

Skipper - Silver Nomination
I cleaned up his history. How is he? 20:51, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

He could use some quotes, but if you can't find any, I think he looks great otherwise. Supporting. :) 21:38, November 5, 2010 (UTC)