Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Skyheart (W) - Redone
Last OA was Ivy. Tweaked the shading 01:28, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 23:18, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:19, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

the stripes looks like theyre lost in the shading and highlights. try to define them more, if you can. 05:36, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:13, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a touch? 00:32, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:56, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be like...two different browns. Any way to fix that? 11:13, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

While this is up, do you think you could possibly make it less golden? 21:50, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I am starting to really hate this image.... >.< 04:06, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Still pretty golden, and you think you could tone down the highlights a bit? 10:37, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

She's the same color as her apprentice and her kit is even more so 00:57, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

But she's golden. Not brown. She might as well be tweaked while she's up rather than tweaking her again later. 03:46, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think you're better off redoing all of these. They all have a golden-greenish color and they all just look really murky. Just a suggestion. 04:55, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Breezey. Although, if it is redone, I think the pattern should be kept.

Oh, thank StarClan! This image is driving me crazy! 22:28, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pattern should definitely be kept, and I think the kit would be an easy enough tweak, but the other two could be redone, yeah. 22:59, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Redone I tried to match the kit pattern, since it didn't really seem to match the warrior and apprentice. I think I made her a tad too dark.... :-/ 04:20, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots(W) - Redone
None of the images matched. OA was Stoney. I based it off of this image, so I'm pretty sure it's natural. Comments? 01:00, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a bit and maybe add some more? 01:20, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

give em' a smudge too; they look a bit paintbrushed on 04:22, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think they need to be smudged. That's not what makes them look paintbrushy. Just point the tips more, kind of like on the elder image, rather than having them so round and you should be fine. Also define the shading, especially on the shoulder. Nice job Ducksauce ouo I swear I will never typo that again   06:48, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe blur or smudge the pale chest into the pelt more so it looks more natural? (or something) 22:58, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Sorry, re-uploaded, I tried. x.x I see the eyes, I'll change them next upload. x3 22:42, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkheart (W) ~ Withdrawn
i swear this was punishment for Troutclaw e.e anyways, redone cause he didn't really look mottled. OA was Icy. This doesn't match at all, but comments? ;-; 12:24 Fri Nov 2

Some of the lines where you smudged are still sharp. Can you blur them? 22:22, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading some? 03:36, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

He looks too spotted. It needs to be more like flecks rather than leopard spots or something. Otherwise it's not actually mottled. 04:58, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm gonna withdraw this. I've lost the file, and it's just a bit difficult trying to match Skt's Hawkheart. 05:13 Tue Nov 6

Husker (KP) ~ Redone
Lol the collar. OA was Hawktalon. Redone because of shading and to be made darker. Comments? 05:27, 07, 11, 2012

Can ya define the shading a bit? what flag is that..? 07:29, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly I think the shading's fine... 10:35, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

I have to agree with Skt, the shading could be defined a bit. 12:09, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. It shows depth, which that's what it's supposed to do. It's honestly fine.

It's fine on the body, but the face and front leg could use some defining. 21:32, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think it could be defined, I can hardly see it. ouo 20:33, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Fallowfern (W) ~ Tweaked
OA is Bloo. Shading tweak. I accidentally murdered the eyes and ear pink, so I redid those.

Could you darken it a tad more? 05:00, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading or darken the pelt color? (I'm sorry... I'm so out of it right now)

The shading. xD There's also a little waste underneath the chin. 05:06, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is an annoying color to work with. ._.

Leopardstar (Alt.D) ~ Redone
I tried. o3o OA was Iceheart22, I think. 22:58, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Though it may just be my computer, she looks a bit green tinted. o3o 23:20, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's just your computer, looks fine to me. Maybe lighten the whole thing a bit so the mottles aren't black? 03:45, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, it actually did look a bit green upon closer inspection. 11:05, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (D) - Redone
Redone to match other images. Took all the colors from the elder done by the wonderful, incredible and sexy Mounty :P 01:44, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

expand the highlights or lessen the shading. The whole image seems to be almost no shading. 05:11 Thu Nov 8

Re-uploaded 04:21, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sagewhisker (MC) ~ Redone
OA was...uh... Silver? I think. Honestly, I can't tell from the file history. The other image was untweakable, so I went and redid it.

Re-uploaded. I got asked to lighten the flank shading a bit.

Cloudberry (W) ~ Tweaked
Just defined the shading on her tail and legs, though changes aren't showing. OA was Bluestar1776 with a tweak(?) made by Stoneh. o3o 22:38, November 8, 2012 (UTC)