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Whiteclaw (Star) - For Approval
My first StarClan charart. Comments? Brick 20:18, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Edity-boop. Showing a version by another member, the pic I made is here http://i59.tinypic.com/25070yc.png Brick  20:19, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, fixed some issue I had with lighting on the face. Link is http://i60.tinypic.com/350kto4.png Brick  06:48, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Whiten the paw some - it's looking gray. 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, hope this is better! http://i62.tinypic.com/110xaiu.png Brick  21:06, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink some - it looks a bit too bright. Also, try using pure white for that paw - maybe it'll make it look whiter. 00:10, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I accidently uploaded an old file instead of the newer version, fixed version issss here --> http://i57.tinypic.com/w1xt9j.png Brick  13:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, especially on the white paw. 17:02 Sun Jun 8

Re-ups, linky is http://i62.tinypic.com/16kysk.png. is it just me or does he look a bit like a plastic toy with his expression and overall look? Brick  16:55, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, especially on the white paw.

Cinderfur (Star) - For Evaluation


Hey so I saw that Cinderfur was on the list for characters needing art, and I'm all like WOO I LOVE THIS GUY. So, here you go. shading i'm so sorry    20:42, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 20:44, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Erm... this isn't the file I uploaded. Wikia, what the heck?!?! 20:45, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the thumbnail of the one you uploaded on the recent photos bar. Define the eye depth and chest shading. Brick 20:50, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups (hopefully Dang it Wikia!)  uggg shading me no likey 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

If it still isn't showing for you (as it seems to be doing for me), I'd reccomend uploading it to an image sharing site like tinypic or Photobucket. Brick 16:45, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Do not use photobucket. That stores the images in albums and things like that. Tinypic is good, and I also think ezimba is a good one.

Still working? 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

I'd like to be, but I've got finals. I'll try to have the chnges uploaded in the next 2-4 days. I get out of school early on Wednesday and Thursday, so I'll have time then, if that's okay? 21:38, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

/ Reups! 18:08, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart.

/ Reups 00:27, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading and blur it some more. 0:41 Sat Jun 14

Re-Ups. If changes aren't /showing 17:16, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt W 2) ~ CBA
(it's the fox-coloured alt, it was agreed months ago) Ah, I remember withdrawing this so long ago :p glad I could get back to it. 21:16, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Make the ear more pink, it looks quite beige. oh my starclan i love that texture      Brick  14:58, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Ear pink looks fine to me.

Hmm, maybe try making the tail texture go with the fur more? As in, make it curve more with the tail. Nice job, dear. 00:12, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Reups gracias~ here's changes 18:30, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Could I get a comment, hm? 17:36, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Add more depth to his ears and eyes. Also, darken the shading a tad.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:56, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not touch the ears or the shading, especially not the ears. And I think the eyes are fine. 14:20, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and blur it on the body a bit.

Reups changes 19:21, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 16:10, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Russetfur (Lo) -CBA
Dazzy's reservation ran out so this is mine now. All colors are from Russet's starclan image 01:09, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Her stripes look a little thinner than on her other images, can you make them slightly thicker please? Brick 14:55, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Looks alright to me 20:42, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Her stripes kinda fade into the shading. I'm not sure how to explain how to fix it but I'm sure you know how. Sorry for not being able to be specific ;-; 16:34, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded 03:44, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs, and I think this'll be good. Scarlet x Russterfur otp

Re-uploaded 22:49, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Poppyfrost(Q) - For Approval
changes this was fun c: 21:27, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Why does it look like she has stripes on her? o.o She needs to be dappled and if you have them, I'm having a rough time seeing them. Also blur the transitions between colors, and blur the shading on the white a lot. At the same time, define the shading on the non-white.

Re-uploaded whoops I though those were stripes when I was going off of the kit lol 22:07, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Changes 00:10, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples just a littttleee bit more? 15:08, 06/7/2014

Re-uploaded 15:53, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add depth- lighten it a bit on her legs and stuff. It'll be lighter in some areas than others. 20:29, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:56, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white.

smudge around the patches a little bit more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:56, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not going to smudge the patches more because the other images don't have it and It was just a small thing I added but i did blur the shading more. c: 02:27, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the patches where they transition to the other colors. Mind you, I'm looking at the warrior when I say this, not the other images.

Re-uploaded 04:42, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Whitetail (Q) ~ CBA
due to the light source of course she'll look a little gray. Comments? 22:35, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you please give a link to the changes? 16:29, 06/8/2014

I see the changes, but here ya go! 22:02, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading, or something? Make it less grey? I know it would look grey, but this looks more grey than it does white. 22:07, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, since 1) Shading darkness is artist's choice, and 2) there's no way I can do that without making her shading look flat, sadly, since most of this light source's shading would make a good portion of the body shaded. 22:10, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

It may be artist's choice, but there's a difference between that and being asked to lighten it so we can /tell/ it's a white cat. I agree with Shoon. While it may be the source, it's still very hard to tell aside from the blindingly white highlights.

re-up i tried 22:37, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

A suggestion I can give if your having issues shading white cats is you can always use tinted shading, like a blue color or something, on white cats. 23:18 Sun Jun 8

Thing is, she wouldn't match her other images with the tint, so I'm using the gray tint. 23:25, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Tint doesn't have to matter between images. If tint totally makes it look super different, maybe your shading is blurred too much/too thick, but since it's just defining where joints and stuff would be on the body it shouldn't matter. 03:31, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

re-up all i did was make it blue-ish o3o 18:19, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

re-up beebs was so lame, she forgot the earpink 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

re-up i usually smudge but okay! 20:29, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the frontmost leg ( this one because i suck at explaining ) and I think this should be pretty good to go, dear.

re-up 22:07, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Quince (Q) - CBA
I stole (not stole lmao since it's mine) the collar for Velvet, since both she and Quince are supposed to have the same style collar for the kittypet and queen images. Changes are here just in case.

Uh, it might be just me, but the picture file is normal lineart, but this looks thinner? o.o 21:38 Fri Jun 6

It's the changes. They're not showing on Wikia (but they are for me, actually), hence why I linked it.

Blur the belly shading a bit? 16:25, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded.

Blur the shading a little and add some more depth to it- add areas where the shading's much darker, and areas where it'd remain lighter. Also make sure all of the shading stays on the lineart, because it's beginning to leak away around her belly. 20:27, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the shading and I really don't like this lmao.

Smudge the shading a little bit more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:57, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

I don't smudge my shading.

Uh, then blur it then? it just looks a bit sharp on the edges.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:52, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I prefer harder-edged shading over overly-blurred shading.

CBA? 03:17, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (Kit) - For Approval
First charart since joining again. Comments? 21:19 Fri Jun 6

I'm sorry but since you reserved after posting this, it may have to be declined... I may be wrong, though, so don't shoot me if I am. 21:30, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

-Shrug- Oh well. My chararts aren't good anyway ;~; 21:31 Fri Jun 6

Nah, it was only a couple minutes, as seen here, and sometimes it takes that long to post an edit somewhere. I think Cloud should be allowed to keep the image. I'd have no complaints. Some people forget the dates at first too and we let them slide.

Okie, just had to check~ ask Berry for the file of one of the other images, I believe Berry did those ones, so that you can get the colours precise; it looks a little lighter than the warrior, but it could just be my kindle. Define your shading and texture too. Don't you say that your chararts aren't good, Whisker; honestly, this is great, for your first in a long time! 21:49, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

I asked her, now I have to wait xD thanks sorrel   22:01 Fri Jun 6

Re-up. Shading is a bit better, I think. Also defined texture. 22:24 Fri Jun 6

Define the texture a bit more? 21:37, 06/7/2014

Re-up. Also defined texture on patches. 23:01 Sat Jun 7

Sharpen and thin out the shading a lot. 20:26, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I oculdn't really sharpen it, but re-upload anyway~ 23:32 Sun Jun 8

Define the shading; it appears a bit flat.

Re-up <span style="">22:06 Thu Jun 12

Runningnose (D) - For Approval
i'll just leave this here <span style="">00:30, 06/7/2014

He needs a gray muzzle. 00:34, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

reup <span style="">02:29, 06/7/2014

Add light to the far hind foot bc that wouldn't totally be in shadow unless he's super awkward at sitting. Thicken the rump shading a little more, and add a bit more towards the center of his haunch because cats are skinny and the bones would protrude a little more on an older cat. 20:24, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">23:39, 06/13/2014

The color on the muzzle is leaking towards part of the herb bundle. <span style="">00:30 Sat Jun 14

I thought it was doing that as well, but it's not. The herb layer is above everything else, so it can't be leaked into. Also, I found some waste, I will reupload momentarily. <span style="">00:36, 06/14/2014

Reuploaded. I also played around with the thickness of the shading on the haunch. If it's too thin, I'll thicken it again, but it looks better to me now ^;;; <span style="">13:20, 06/14/2014

Tansy(Lo): For Approval
Eee I'm very happy about Fircone uvu! Here's Tansy! http://www.ezimba.com/work/140607C/ezimba18819864628800.png Anais ♥ (talk)   01:40, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading a little, thin it out a touch, and settle on one light source: the shading on the left and face suggest it's coming from the front of the body, but everything else says it's coming from above. Fantastic job though! 20:23, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Brook (KM) - For Approval
changes  <span style="">21:31, 06/7/2014

Define the facial shading juust a bit. 22:20, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it just fine; I'd rather not touch it unless a few more agree. ^;;; <span style="">15:24, 06/8/2014

Just a tiny bit more. Love those eyes *.* <span style="">19:08 Sun Jun 8

reuploaded <span style="">19:20, 06/8/2014

Lighten the shading a little or tint it navy or something because her whole rear half looks black. 20:19, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the chest shading?

Reuploaded. There is no chest shading. <span style="">22:57, 06/13/2014

Wouldn't her head at least cast some shadow on her chest, at least???

Reups. Yeah it would. I was only like half awake when I reuploaded yesterday lmao. <span style="">13:13, 06/14/2014

Marmalade (Lo) - For Approval
So, any thoughts? Not sure if I totally matched the stripes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:20, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Totally forgot to add the tear in his ear. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:29, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Changed some shading that was bugging me. (sorry I'll stop after this 'til someone comments) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:53, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

blur the tail, facial, and neck shading a tad? 05:06, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Did you remember to tear his ear? I can't tell whether it's there Dazzling, sweetie 15:36, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, the ear tear is there, but it's small so it's hard to tell. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:45, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on his tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:59, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the shading a bit, I hope that helped. I wasn't sure what you meant by thicken. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:44, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Nice! Can you blur the shading a tad, and maybe tint the shading red as it kinda looks gray now.

I couldn't find a way to convert the shading I already had to a red-ish color, so I had to lay red shading overtop of the black shading I already had. I hope that didn't mess up the changes I already made too much. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:23, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face just a bit, maybe? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:16, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:14, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Star) ~ For Approval
?? i tried 02:39, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

This is beautiful, wow. Maybe darken her coat a little, it looks a bit darker in her other images. 20:26, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thats amazing. :) Define the scars a little bit and define the ear pink.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 19:32, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Possibly blur the spots on her back pattern a liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittle bit more? Wow. 18:11, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the shading; it seems kinda flat, and can you darken the stripes/spots a tad?

re-uploaded eh i tried 10:16, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a bit pinker, I can't really tell if there's any there. 19:22, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 00:09, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Ottersplash (Q) - CBA
- meh. All the colors are from her warrior 03:45, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe try tinting her shading just a little bit more on the dark red side? It's starting to really make the ginger look gray-ish. idk what color you used to shade the ginger so if you're already using that kind of color plz ignore me

Define the shading on the face, and get rid of the white background. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:55, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:04, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Put a bit of highlight on her <<< cheek. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:55, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:14, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge where the orange and white meets.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:49, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur it a bit, but not much. She shouldn't smudge it since she has another image to match.

Re-uploaded I don't want to blur the markings much more than this 03:50, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Snowfur (Q) ~ For Approval
Should I tint the shading a more blue-gray? Not sure if it looks gray or not. changes here, if they're not showing; comments? 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. It lookd really dark on a white cat~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:49, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 16:56, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading.

Reups 19:25, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Q) - For Approval
My other Queen image finished the CBA period, but it hasn't been approved yet, so I wasn't sure if I was allowed to post this yet. But I wanted to get it up before I went to bed, so I figured I'd try. If not, I'll take it down until my other image is approved. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:26, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Here are the changes, in case they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140610C/ezimba19266766152300.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:27, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

I've approved Dappletail, but next time, please wait until the image is approved and archived. Otherwise, we'll decline it.

I will, I'm sorry. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:06, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:48, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:38, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define it a little more, and also define the shading on all four legs.

Blackclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
-That was annoying to make. But whatever! I probably missed something. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:50, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Make his nose black. If you look at black cats in real life, almost all of them have black noses. Also, add a little more depth to the eyes. Great charart :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:46, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, in this case, the nose has to match the color of the other images nose colors, which I'm fairly certain it does. 02:55, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

His nose is black on his kit and apprentice.

Yeah okay, so sorry 'bout that. Guess I'm more color blind than thought. 03:00, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks for the compliment, Breeze. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:54, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Here's the colors just in case you couldn't get them right because of my shading. The smokey things are at about 25% opacity, and I used a flecked brush to smudge/place them on the charart. If you want one of the files for direct colors, opacity levels, ect, go ahead and say so and I can fire them your way. =) I shade weirdly lmao

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thank you! <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 22:07, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 16:08, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Tom (KP) - CBA
Hi.

Awesome (much better than mine)! Maybe define the shading a little? I can barely see it. 14:38, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you~

Hmm, maybe make the earpink more red? idk the color just doesn't seem to suit him. Those eyes are fantastic *steals* <span style="">21:41 Wed Jun 11

Re-uploaded. I love the eyes too no stealing.

CBA? 03:17, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Q) ~ For Approval
And I thought this one was going to be easy. I underestimated this image. Comment away~ <span style="">21:41 Wed Jun 11

Define the shading, and maybe darken it slightly. It looks really good though. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 23:43, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. <span style="">23:52 Wed Jun 11

Well those are some good looking stripes. Can you blur the shading a tad? owo

Re-uploaded. Merci. <span style="">16:38 Thu Jun 12

Jackdaw's Cry (Star) ~ For Approval
Yay. :3 Comments?

Define/darken the shading, and could you smudge it so that it flows with the fur? Those are some really amazing eyes. <span style="">16:39 Thu Jun 12

Smudging the shading isn't mandatory. =/ Idk what everyone's thing is with smudging but not everyone does it

No, that's not it. I can clearly see that the shading is smudged, so I'm only suggesting that it be smudged in the way of the fur. ;) <span style="">18:07 Thu Jun 12

Add the texture. It's a bit faint, but it is there. 19:12, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay then. It doesn't look smudged to me but whatever. o.O

Re-up ~ I thought nobody would see I smudged the shading a little bit, but oh well. XD I'm not really good at smudging shading so I added a very thin layer of highlight and smudged that, but it's hard to see on a black cat. And Bbun, what do you mean with texture? Sorry, I'm from the Netherlands so my English may not be really good. ^_^"

As in, the dark black "stripes" on his rogue. Those are texture. Please add it ^^;;. 18:16, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Hope I got what you meant. :3

Yellowfang (Alt Star) ~ CBA
She got called pale gray in a TNP book. Comments? 21:40, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on her chest a tiny bit more. Great charart bbun :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:53, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, unless someone disagrees, because then the shoulder and chest shading begin to recede. 21:56, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Just a wee bit. This is amazing *.* <span style="">0:42 Sat Jun 14

re-up 00:47, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

How about a CBA? She's dazzling. 16:06, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Mossheart (Star) ~ For Approval
Withdrew from Hawkheart's StarClan image to do this one. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:13, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

Shapen the patches some. 20:46, June 14, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:57, June 14, 2014 (UTC)