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Pad (ki) - For Evaluation
did i name this rightWillowstep12 (talk) 15:43, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

am i allowed to do this?Willowstep12 (talk) 15:45, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

I'm honestly not sure given that this is a blank redo. As one of Broken's images, would this count as an original technically?

...sorry i did not knowWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Were...were kits even decided to be done yet? I don't recall a verdict being reached.

19:45, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

Kits will be done next month. However, this can be converted a to minor character (like a tortie kit) if you make it look like one Willow. For now, it doesn't appear you saved the image correctly, as this is a thumbnail. Click the image on the main page, click the file name, then right click and click "Save as" and name it, for example, TPB-kit-2 and the .png will stick on the end. It doesn't appear you are using layers as the colors are leaking past the lineart. See Apprentice Tutorials. Add shading to the front leg, face, and tail. The remaining shading needs to be blended. You can try the Smudge tool (10 pixels at 40 percent is best.) Make sure to take you time! 22:00, March 28, 2019 (UTC)

The lines seem to be somewhat blurry, similar to what Greenflower said. Also, maybe add some depth to the eyes as well as shines? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  01:11, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

i will try, its my first charartWillowstep12 (talk) 18:21, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

where should i place the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 19:16, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a tutorial on light sources in the Apprentice Tutorials. 22:08, March 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks will check  that out will update image on mondayWillowstep12 (talk) 18:46, March 30, 2019 (UTC)

re uploaded how did i do with the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 12:45, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

De-thumb the image by going into source mode and removing the |left|. 13:02, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

I removed the thumb tag from the image. Other than that could you define and extend the shading - I believe it's coming from the back but it's hard to see. Also I think there needs to be shading on the head, paws and tail. 15:27, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

re uploaded added the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 16:45, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Remember to not thumb your images. If you're unsure how to get rid of it, remove the thumb from this and that'll fix it. Add shading onto the tail and all the legs and paws, and add some to the side of the head too. Line art appears to be missing as well, can you fix that? 16:52, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Pad.kit.png, or it won't work with the wiki's templates. Also, you shouldn't be doing this on one layer, because if you do that, lineart can be erased. Have you tried using multiple layers? If so, you should get into a habit of doing that. 22:09, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

I am using mumble layers  but I flatten the image to blend and shadeWillowstep12 (talk) 00:45, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

re uploaded fixed it i thinkWillowstep12 (talk) 12:45, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb the image. That messes up the structure of the page. Also, I don't think we're starting kits yet.. 12:58, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

should i remove this sectionWillowstep12 (talk) 13:05, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, this could stay up if you change it to a minor character. You can check the charart page for a full list of minor kits that need images. However, this counts as a kit (and a redone image of the blocked user Broken Foot), which will be redone along with warriors in the summer. 22:09, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Also, this is still thumbnail-sized. Use this and do the image on that. Then it should no longer look shrunken. 22:13, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

i will cheak this outWillowstep12 (talk) 17:23, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

can someone decline this image so i can work on other charart im allowed to doWillowstep12 (talk) 13:46, April 8, 2019 (UTC)

Smokefoot (E) ~For Approval
Shading is hard.

01:26, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to say this, but define it more. I have to zoom in close to see it. I also think there's an unfilled pixel on the tail? 01:43, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add depth to the ear pink? It seems a bit flat.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:35, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

06:06, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could still use defining

Reuploaded

19:44, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 22:09, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

03:03, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

hm the shading could still use some defining. try darkening it and then using a 40 opacity eraser tool to erase the edges? 05:18, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Updated.

02:44, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more shading along the bottom of the face and the ears. There's also leaking shading on the front elbow area. You're doing great! :) 21:54, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Vec, I think I got it? I'm just terrible with shading lmao.

22:51, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

waste behind the head

smoothshading out Willowstep12 (talk) 17:21, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed

18:29, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, given the source, there wouldn't be any shading on the front of the chest; rather, it'd be on the < side. I also believe the haunch shading should be receded and rounded out a bit.

Better?

19:02, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

hmm maybe could you smooth the shading on the haunch to shoulder place? it seems a little hard -- 13:57, 4/07/2019

Looks fine to me? Might be my screen though. 00:03, April 8, 2019 (UTC)

Moss (KP) (KP)- For Evaluation
Comment Away!-- 18:54, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Looking good! Her muzzle looks a bit bright compared to the rest of her set, so darken it up a bit. Expand the shading everywhere, but particularly on the hind legs. 19:14, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks Egg! I colorpicked off the loner, not sure why it looks brighter. Will fix momentarily. 19:45, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't want to expand it anymore on the tail, or I'll be told to define the light. 19:54, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe smoothen out and blur the shading more? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:35, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Of course! I'll do that in a little bit. 22:39, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Shadow, can you be more specific on where it needs to be smoothed out? 22:52, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the back of the haunch and shoulder! -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:58, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it more on the <--- haunch and stomach? The shading is also leaking on the collar. Also, I feel like the shading tint clashes with the color of the image. Maybe make it darker? 23:14, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vec, where is it leaking on the collar? And can I gently ask for a second opinion on the tint? Silverfur used a similar color on Flailfoot's tunneler. 23:37, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded for other commments 23:48, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. I can't see it at all. ​

red line. And the tint is darker on Flailfoot's tunneler since it was tweaked. Darkening the tint might also help with darkening the shading overall, forgot to mention earlier ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 02:59, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

i appreciate you mentioning me ^^ could i ask what's the black specks near the rear leg? -- 11:34, 4/01/2019

To explain comments:

Vec: It isn't leaking, it's just light shading. I'll fix it next upload.

Silver: That's a layer goof, fix next upload.

Jayce: I'll saturate the shading a bit, but like 2 clicks or so otherwise it'll look neon. 22:06, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded here's your proof shading isn't leaking. Better? 23:06, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a bit darker? I can't really see it. 23:09, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Potato, I didn't say you had to saturate the shading. I couldn't see it, meaning it should probably have the opacity turned up. The tint itself is perfectly fine as-is, and you're right that multiple people have used that tint before. ​​

Reuploaded sorry, got confused with your's and Vec's comment. Anywho, I don't want to darken it much more or the lineart won't be noticeable anymore. Better? 23:31, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the ears, belly, tail, legs and back ^^  -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  23:36, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think with the source I'm using, there shouldn't be shading on the back. Shadow, can you screenshot where? 00:11, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like you've got waste all over the image. 01:46, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think there is any waste on my screen in PS, but this may be a result of blurring the shading and I'll check tomorrow. 02:09, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded you were right, and there was waste. If it is still showing up, I'll wave the eraser in those areas tomorrow. 02:32, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

going to nitpick on the shading as it's really light and makes the image odd. it can be tweaked by making the layer mutiply and making the tint a darker blue. -- 04:46, 4/02/2019

Reuploaded changes aren't showing yet. 21:43, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Changes are now showing. 22:09, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading out more? 05:17, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, paws and legs. 12:37, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ham with Gaussian Blur. Better? 22:36, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the gray muzzle and ear-pink and I really can't tell where the light it coming from 00:19, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'll blur the muzzle, but can I gently ask for a second opinion on the earpink? On a previous declined art, I tried to blur it but it looked like a hot mess. The light is coming from the right, so the shading is on the left. 00:49, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded for paler muzzle if I need to blur more just let me know. 00:53, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

you still need to smooth out the shading. 02:17, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Used the smudge tool this time. 21:57, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Theres waste everywhere outside the image 23:53, 4/04/2019

Reuploaded if it's still there, idk what to tell you because I'm pretty sure I erased it all. 01:07, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

It is still there unless the changes are not showing. Try having a white background so that you can see the waste more clearly.

Reuploaded I think I got it all. 22:04, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading some more ? 14:23, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded also tweaked the paler muzzle. 15:23, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again waste. It should be gone now, cause I noticed more and got my lucky lasso. 15:35, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, there wouldn't be any shading on the > side of the haunch, nor at the top of the shoulder, though it should extend higher up the arm from the bottom^^

Reuploaded  20:25, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

The waste is still there under the front arm. collar shading is leaking <-

define the light on the front leg nearest to us? -- 13:56, 4/07/2019

Reuploaded I'll get rid of the waste later. 15:18, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Rosetail (E) ~ For Approval
back and ready for the elder rush

15:00, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Did you fill in the nose? It's either not filled in or is a very light color. Define/Darken it. 22:11, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

The nose is filled in and doesn’t need defining. ​​

Stripes seem to fade in color a bit more as they go down the front legs on the other images^^

Reuploaded

22:13, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. So I meant the stripes become almost lighter/less visible as they go down to the paws on the front legs, could you see about perhaps tweaking it a little more?

Longtail (e) ~ For Approval
his stripe pattern is annoyingly spacy but ya' know.

15:34, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Would you object to softening the stripes every so slightly? These are a tiny bit sharper than his other images. It's not a lot, and I apologize if this is insanely picky. ​​​​​​

Can you make his eye more cloudy? On the original elder and the soon-to-be redone warrior, it was completely clouded over and the pupil wasn't visible. If I'm wrong, you don't have to do it. ;) 22:27, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

22:17, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could be my laptop, do let me know, but the base on this seems darker than the star. Ik the star and app don't match, but the star would be more correct due to being lighter per his cites

The Star was also the first one tweaked, so it has to match that anyways. ​​

Cinderfur (E) - For Approval
Haven't done one of these in too long Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 02:47, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and paws? 12:05, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the haunch shading a tad 19:53 Tue Apr 2

Where is the lightsource coming from? I can't tell. 22:11, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

looks like the top left? -- 01:50, 4/03/2019

Blur/smudge the earpink into the fur a tad more- it just looks hard. 02:11, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:05, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Mistpelt (E) - CBA
she's baby 19:52 Tue Apr 2

Define the light source on the ear and paws? 21:48, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out shading?Willowstep12 (talk) 12:48, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded did this in lecture lol 15:05 Thu Apr 4

Could you define the earpink, or remove some of the shading that's in the ear? 21:51, April 4, 2019 (UTC)\

reuploaded pinkened it some 19:32 Fri Apr 5

Could you define the shading on the chin and ears, and define the light on the tail (or the shading depth of the tail, it just seems a touch flatter there than elsewhere)?

reuploaded better? 22:53 Sat Apr 6

Lighten the shading at the base of the tail. I can't see the texture through it. 23:02, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 00:35 Sun Apr 7

CBA? 19:06, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Tiny black kit (Ki) - For evaluation
I hope it's not weird- my first ever charart!



09:03, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

hello, you need to add shading to the image. what program are you using? check out the tutorials if you need help, or dont hesitate to reach out to anybody here 09:13, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add earpink and nosepink. 13:04, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

darken the the eye puple, what program are you using?Willowstep12 (talk) 13:09, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

I do have GIMP-but it's hard, so yeah. My paint program that's I'm using i don't think it works well without transparent images. Welp I'll use something else. And I did add shading, but it's not that dark I think. I'll add earpink and nosepink.

There! I fixed it (I hope :P)

That's better. However, by the looks of it, you aren't using layers, which means colors can leak past the lineart. Don't get me? See Apprentice Tutorials. Smudge the earpink into the fur more- use the smudge tool at 10px at 40% strength. You can also blur the earpink too using the blur tool or going to filters>blur>Gaussian Blur. Gaussian Blur is really good ;). You also have missing lineart in some places, and finally, add shading. Grab a color (Blue or Red is best) put it on the pelt following a light source, then lighten it with the opacity bar. Then blur or smudge it till it's nice and smooth, then set the layer to multiply to make it darker so it doesn't clash with the base. This is good for your first charart! 22:21, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

try a grayish redish pinkisk color for ear pink,  i dont think pastel pink is a good choise for catsWillowstep12 (talk) 12:46, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

There-redone it!



The lineart is a bit blurry, are you using layers? are there layers in your art program? -- 10:16, 4/05/201

You don't need to post a new image every time. Go to the tiny kit's file and find "Upload a new version of this file". Then insert your file and upload the changes. Then come back here and tell us you Reuploaded. 13:02, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

I reuploaded- this time I used layers!



22:14, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

That is better- but you didn't notice my comment. What I meant was you go to the kit's file name by clicking on the image and the file name. Scroll down and click "Upload a new version of this file". Insert the update and click upload, and come back here and indicate you reuploaded. You don't need to post the image again every single time. Blur/smudge the earpink at the end a bit, and you still need to add shading. Also, perhaps darken the shade of the earpink a tad too? 22:53, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Brokenstar (E) - For Approval
why do i do these things to myself? 16:39, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front of him (legs, tail, face, etc.). 22:25, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:14, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

theres one little speck of waste on his chest fur -- 10:31, 4/05/2019

could you possibly make the fur vary a bit more so that its not as uniform and that it looks more natural? 12:09, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:56, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

is it just me or was the eye linear art removed?

no it's not just you, the eye lineart is removed it seems? -- 13:54, 4/07/2019

It's missing for me too. Scarlet, did you happen to erase something on the first layer? 14:43, April 7, 2019 (UTC)


 * Yes it is removed. I did that on purpose for the blinding scars around his eyes. It was like that on the old elder too 18:32, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfur (SC) ~ For Approval
I think its alright to make his eyes green instead of blue? his eye color was never specified.... 19:13, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the --> ear? And yeah it's super minor so it should be ok :) 21:42, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Might just be me being dumb, but wasn't he listed with blue eyes? On his page it says he is. However, I'm not anyone of high status here so it doesn't matter much. -- John made it. He’s the only one. Rest of us… no.  But… I tried. In the end. I did.  23:58, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Where on his page? I just checked and there is nothing about blue eyes.. 00:25, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! And I looked, but I couldn't find any mentions of them being blue.. 15:12, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Oh, forget about me. I was looking at the wrong Ashfur... sorry to hold up your developments,  John made it. He’s the only one. Rest of us… no.  But… I tried. In the end. I did.  01:57, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:59, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to break CBA, but the shading is leaking away from the lineart in a few spots - at the base of the chest, > side of the belly, and at the base of the arm where it meets the tail. Also, I believe the light on the tail tip could stand to be defined

Nettlebreeze (E) ~ CBA
heres a baby note: the thing under the eye is just watery. baby has rheumy eyes. -- 07:49, 4/05/2019

There appears to be more stripes on his other images

reups how about this? -- 13:01, 4/05/2019

There's another tail stripe closer to the rear, and the thinner stripes should be receded a bit on the tail according to the apprentice. 14:27, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

reups -- 02:35, 4/06/2019

He'd need a v slight dorsal stripe, I believe (it's more visible on the star than the app, due to angles); and can you expand the shading to go higher up the arm to form a shoulder, and add a touch just on the > side of the tail that hits the cat's backside. If that doesn't make sense, this source is pretty much the same one I used here, for how the tail shading just kinda flips halfway when the light goes > way

reups -- 13:32, 4/07/2019

CBA?

Tawnyspots (E) ~ For Approval
-- 10:37, 4/05/2019

Seems like there's a dorsal stripe on the star, and the stripes are thinner

there actually is a dorsal, it's just really undefined. -- 12:44, 4/05/2019

reups is this better? -- 12:58, 4/05/2019

smooth out shading?Willowstep12 (talk) 13:30, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

The thicker stripes here still seem a bit too thick. Try slimming them more? There also appears to be more stripes and longer ones on the og elder. And they curve more, too. 14:29, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

can you soften/smudge the shading and maybe expand it a little bit 19:58, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

reups -- 02:30, 4/06/2019

can you lighten/smooth otu the shading? 05:36, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Same shading comment here as on Nettlebreeze^^

reups -- 13:31, 4/07/2019

Could you elongate/connect the stripes on the flank/stomach area, the <--- front shoulder/forearm, and the tail? 19:08, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E) ~ CBA
17:35, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the grey? I can barely see it. 19:42, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 20:02, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Patchy fur needs to have skin showing (I think? Somebody correct me if I'm wrong.). 21:56, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

it doesnt. -- 02:21, 4/06/2019

i think it actually should, given that patchy fur implies that there are patches of bald parts 05:38, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

hmm I'm not sure but I think the ginger needs to be removed as he is only said to be brown and gray

Reups I just added the bald patches. Figured there wouldn't be any harm in adding them. Also, those lighter patches were a light brown so I just made them darker. 17:36, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. Could you make the patch/tuft on the front paw a little smaller? That leg's further from us (the viewer) and it looks a little awk with it's current size imo

Reups 23:47, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Echosong (KP) - CBA
Everything from the original KP 17:46 Fri Apr 5

cute!! Can you lighten the ear shading a tad bit? 19:34 Fri Apr 5

Reuploaded 12:14 Mon Apr 8

CBA?

Runningnose (E) ~ CBA
i'm just tired of looking at it so here i'll add the snotnose and such later 21:45, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

snotnose lmao were the blanks suppose to have the eaprink on the -> ear? -- 02:38, 4/06/2019

Having earpink on another ear is acceptable. I've seen archives with Skt's art where he puts pink on both ears and he wasn't called out for it. 02:48, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded idk I always saw this angle as being able to see both if you wanted 01:46, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Light-colored Thunderclan Kit (K)
helloo this is a minor character from bluestar's prophecy so em here.

Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 21:45, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

feel free to comment!

Don't thumb the image! Simply remove |right and that should fix it. Add earpink and shading to the back back foot, the shoulder on the front foot, and the haunch. Smooth out the shading, as it's very hard-edged. 21:54, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed the shading!

Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 22:16, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

I fixed the thumb. Don't do that in the future! Smooth out the shading more and expand it. Also remove "mod" from the file name.-- 22:44, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

I accidentally made the pixels bigger by alot, so I had to reupload it. Sorry for any inconvinience, but I'll try to work around it. Made the eyes have a bit more depth, tried to smooth the shading but not by alot. The image's name is BP.kit.lc Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 11:31, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be added/defined/expanded/smoothed out. The file name needs to have the kit's number, not the pelt color. You also somehow deleted Star's comment?? 14:07, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

The file name isn't important right now, a lead can always rename it once it's been approved. But if you'd like to upload it under it's correct name, it would be BP.kit-2.png (it's the light colored thunderclan kit, i believe?) Do you need a shading placement guide for this? I could provide one if needed. Can you smooth the earpink and add some eye depth? 15:10, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for reminding me Patch. The earpink needs to be expanded to the left. Also, before you deleted her comment, Star said for you to blur/smudge the pale parts on his/her face. Maybe enlarge the pupil? It's kinda hard to see atm. 15:39, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Blackclaw (E) ~ CBA
This is (basically) my first contribution, so I hope I did this right! Tinystream (talk) 00:48, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Fixed a few mistakes I saw! Tinystream (talk) 01:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light a bit more? Wow! I'm amazed at your skills! Shading black cats is usually a pain. Good job! 01:18, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reup How's this? Thank you! Tinystream (talk) 01:57, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

I've added you to the reservation table. Make sure to add your reservation and date in the future for each character you want. It's how we make sure someone didn't claim this first. :) 02:26, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Fixed some of the shading. Oh, thanks! Tinystream (talk) 02:54, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Tinystream (talk) 05:12, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Very very good for a first image^^ A small thing; smooth the transition between the lighter and darker color in the eyes, just so it's more of a gradient

Reup That should've fixed it. Also, more shading tweaks! Tinystream (talk) 20:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reup I'll never be happy with the shading. Tinystream (talk) 22:34, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Tinystream (talk) 02:18, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reup So many mistakes, not enough time! Tinystream (talk) 18:11, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Well I'm happy with this. CBA? Nicely done! ^^ 19:10, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Silver Frost (E) ~ For Approval
pretty kitty 00:59, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light in the ear closest to us. 01:19, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:43, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm assuming your light source is heading < that way towards the cat, so remove the shading on --> side of the shoulder/forearm area, and ---> side of the haunch. 02:32, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit, please. ​​

Reuploaded 23:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

define shading a little bit more on the ear furthest from us? -- 13:52, 4/07/2019

Hm. Vec's comment doesn't seem to have been addressed - the light source is contradictory as is. To most easily remedy what's there, the shading on the > side of the arm and the > side of the haunch, and any shading along the back that's further than the shoulder would need to be removed. Then, the shading'd be expanded to the tail tip, belly, < side of the chest, < side of the visible arm, along the backside of the cat and some reaching to the chin.

Tabby Warrior 1 (W) ~ For Approval
I hate doing the headings for these... 01:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

This may be hard, but define the tail shading a tad? It blends in with the brown. 01:44, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

could you dull that white down so that it looks like a pale part? also could you taper the stripes some?

smudge the stripes into a bit more of a taper at the ends, they're a little too paint-brushy 05:59, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

With all due respect, why can't I leave it white? I based this off my own kitty. Unless there's some rule with minor characters I missed...? 11:36, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Unless the character is described as tabby and white explicitly, adding white would be an assumption.

Reuploaded Uh... I tried. Also, RIP, sorry Misty that I couldn't make you a charart... If anyone finds a Leafpool-like cat with art to be done lmk? 23:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

There is quite a bit of waste outside the tail, and one small speck outside the chin/neck. 23:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

if there is supposed to be shading, could u define shading on the tail i can barely see it -- 13:58, 4/07/2019

Expand the shading on the < side of the lower back to curve down and meet with the pale bit down there - and remove the shading on the > side of the haunch, as the light source doesn't call for it.

Oakfur (E) - CBA
He looks kind of dusty  17:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad? And maybe define the texture on the tail tip as well? 17:24, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

reup much better  17:54, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Kinkfur (E) ~ CBA
15:45, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading a little bit?

Re-uploaded. 23:02, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

tbh I like this so CBA?