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Dawnbright (W) ~ Redone
Needed to have realistic stripes. OA=Mistystar139. I'd rather leave the stripes how they are but if anyone really wants them changed then I'll do it. :3 Comments? 04:10, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

No way! This is pretty <333 Make the earpink a tab bit bigger. 04:22 Wed Feb 29

Uh, she's brown xD Make her more orange. 04:24, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Thanks Mountaindork <3 15:15, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. ^^ 20:08, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more ginger 8D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 02:15, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Not to be very picky, and this might just be me, but the shading is a little bit to dark overall. Could you just lighten it up? Also blur the tail shading too. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  20:15, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think this might be as ginger as it will get.. x3 But eh. 03:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the highlight/lighter part/thing a bit bigger? 8D Sky Gatlocke 11:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Don't hate me, but she still looks like a light-brown cat 00:18, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmkay, I'll try my best, I'll upload soon x3 *doesn't hate you* 02:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe have the colors a bit closer to Brightheart or Flowerstar? don't hurt me! *hides*  00:12, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Scarlet, it's fine. XD I'm really sorry, I don't know what the problem is but whenever I try to make it more ginger, it looks so unnatural... Did my best, though. :3 Oh, and Sky, where? 05:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Meh, it was just a preference, I just thought the lighter part looked a little small on the shoulder. Sky Molto bene 23:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Ivy. It was just a preference, feel free to ignore it. Define the ear-pink a bit 23:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, uh, sorry. x3 Can choo define the neck shading if it's there, or is that whole bit shaded? x.x Sky Molto bene 23:52, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlight/lighter part on the shoulder. 06:13, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky Molto bene 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out and blur the chest, paws, and tail tip feathering; it looked a bit choppy 23:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste, Trolly. ^^; Also, blur the ear pink. 03:05, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add the slightest tad more opacity to the shading. *thought Cloudy was Sky e3e* 08:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yea, blur the shading, too. Forgot to mention that up ^^^there. Dazzle did what now? =P  09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge that hard edged bit off to the right on the white on the tail? How did you mistake her for my awesomeness? xD Sky Molto bene   12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over C:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 21:26, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

I attempted to match it to the warrior image's pattern. Don't look at it, it's ugly D:  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 22:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <3 Lovely Elo 22:03 Sun Mar 4

Blur it, too. 22:32, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match all that well. It seems like the alt apprentice's stripes were based off the normal warrior image, so using that as a ref on what it'd look like from this angle might help. 15:27, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I tried to match the warrior; I didn't suceed. Withdrawing because I don't want to get frustrated Dx  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 20:59, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 00:54, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:06, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes, and make him more golden, less pale yellow. 00:09, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean, 'smudge the stripes'? I can't 'cause I'm taking the stripes of the apprentice image, and not all tabby stripes need smudging. Also, I took the color from the apprentice, but I'll try to change it. 00:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think the colour is fine, but blur the tail shading and make the earpink a bit paler. <3 Sky Molto bene 00:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Oh sorry didn't know this was off of another image, but I think the pelt should be a little darker. 00:36, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The pelt color's fine, Wild. Blur the rest of the shading, along with what Trolly said. 00:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the stripes more golden? 07:57, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (W) ~ Redone
OA was Blackclaw09 and it needed to be redone because the shading was blotchy and highlights needed to be brightened. Also, I see the brown on her leg, I'll fix it in the next Upload. 23:01, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

he earpink is much to big, so make is smaller. Darken the shading, and blur where the white meet the brown just on the neck above the chin. Looks great! 23:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail, and the white on the back paw. There is also some brown mixed in with the white on the front paw (the one closest to us), and can you lighten the shading on the legs just a tad? 01:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

What's up with that ear pink, Rowan? Did you try it like the leader images? Define the shading, darken it, and define the highlight (or whatever it is) on the haunch, 'cause it looks like it's all shading. 04:58, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks neat to me. :P Can you blur that top part of the white? And (if possible, otherwise disregard this) make the white curve with the body a bit? Sky Molto bene 11:35, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and make the earpink less gray and more pink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:02, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried to make the earpink like the queen on my past one. 22:48, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white area more white it looks gray, also make it match the queen more, and lighten the image. 23:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 16:14, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you fix the earpink? It looks gray. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lightness on the face. Sky Molto bene 02:27, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, it looks kinda flat. 03:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm looking at the tweak nominations right now, and she just needed to be tweaked. You can leave yours, it's fine, but in the future pay attention to whether it's in the tweak or redo section. 17:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh I'm sorry Dx Re-Uploaded. 18:18, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 07:56, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (W) - Tweaked
I've been telling myself to tweak more chararts. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Night Shine. Shading had to be darker. 00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading. 00:53, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:56, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her shoulder. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  12:14, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define "highlight" on the shoulder, blur the earpink, and lighten the entire image to match. 22:51, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:26, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like there isn't any flecks on her shoulder, which doesn't match her queen. Maybe add some? 01:53, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:45, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add 2-3 more flecks to the shoulder, and blur the whole thing a bit more~ 06:46, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:53, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E)- Tweaked
Tweak patched cause they were too neon. OA=Ashshadow 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink match the patches' colour? Or do the other way around... 03:06, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - sorry it look a while, Im using my parent's laptop and I'm getting confused with all the files 04:01, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

The patchy fur is awfully bright. Hurts mah eyes Dx Tone it down a bit? 08:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (D) - Tweaked
There are so many changes to this file, it's hard to keep track.. But the first OA was Sandy, with the most recent redo by Iceheart. He needed a floofy tail. 17:51, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the tail pweeze. Maybe make it a bit pineconey, kinda like Squirrelflight's? 23:55, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Or, if you want him to have a bottlebrush tail, go nuts with it. Yeah, that's a ferret's tail, but it's the first pic I found of a nutso bottlebrush tail. 00:14, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more 'floof' to the bottom where it's straight, kinda like the warrior? 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dat floof >:C 20:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the tail lineart some more. 21:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

See my comment on the warrior. I can't; there simply aren't enough pixels to fit all that 21:43, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (W) - Tweaked
Fluffff <3 OA was Insane with a redo by Iceheart. 18:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the bushy-ness more even at the top of the tail, it kind of dips. 21:59, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

And make the lines on the tail thicker. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't make the lines on the tail thicker or it won't look the same. Trust me. The same applies for the deputy. 20:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it a bit.... crazier to match the deputy? XD And there's like two random black pixels inside the tail near the base. 07:24, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudberry (Q) - Redone
Redone to match warrior image. OA was Echomist with (minor) tweaks by Bramble and Ivy. 00:56, 11, 03, 2012

Blur the flank shading and enlarge the earpink a tad. 00:58 Sun Mar 11

Blur the tail shadin~ Sky Molto bene  02:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad more desturated? 06:11, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  01:19, 12, 03, 2012

Rubblepaw (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Moonleaf, and needed to be darkened, for he's actually black. =3 I'm not changing anything except the darkness of the pelt. Comments? 17:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter parts to make them more distinct :3 This is adorable~ 07:53, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
The patches were over-blurred in some places and shading was some-what blotchy. OA's were Sandstar, Bloo, and Leaf-storm. 19:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, you're fine. 8D Just lighten and blur the earpink. 21:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  22:23, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:24, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I dont think the changes are showing... 22:33, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest a tad. :3 23:00, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Move the highlight of the eye to match the light source and maybe make the tail tip a bit wavier? It looks kinda funny since it's just straight, but that's just my opinion. 23:59, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable/define it. 01:14, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the shading/highlight/lighter spot on his shoulder --  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the gray into the white? He's long-furred, so I think it oughta look furry. :3 03:11, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since smudging is optional and other images would have to be tweaked it if was smudged, I think it should stay as is. Could you whiten the white a little though? 06:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (Ki) - Tweaked
I didn't want him to be tweaked by someone else.... XD Alright so his tail needed to be bushier, and I personally have always hated the shading on him so since I had the xcf file I changed it. As well as a minor change to the eyes and colors to match. I love keeping xcf files.... XD OA was Nightfall with a redo by me. Comments? 20:49, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Poppydawn (E) ~ Tweaked
xP Ew... If you squint your eyes shut, it kind of looks pretty... ._. Oh gosh I think I ruined Poppydawn... xD Had to redo the stripes. OA is Dawnfeather with redos/tweaks by Rainwhisper. 23:03, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the stripe that goes through her forehead. I never put anything like that on her. The stripes look too dark and the shading looks too light. The stripes are supposed to be a little sharper and less blurred. 02:24, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lionheart (Ki) ~ Redone
Ehehehe I totally forgot he was a kit x.x OA was Icethroat and the mane tweak was by Leafstorm. Comments? 23:06 Sun Mar 11

Shredtail (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine with a tweak by me. The fur on the tail look all choppy, the scars looked paint brushed on, and he was a modified triangle tabby. I hate to have to redo one of Night Shine's fantastic chararts, but for the sake of realism... Comments? 23:37, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

P.S. I forgot to add ragged fur, I'll do that when I reupload. 23:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't the tail tip be rounded a bit? To quote myself on chat: "Holy sh**." 23:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Haha luff ya, Cloudy! :) 23:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the naked part of his tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 02:40, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The scars on his tail look off. They go onto parts of his tail that would be fur, not skin. To fix this, either add bare patches where you know the tail would be, or remove the scars in their entirety. Also, can you take the smudge tool and make the scars taper in a more natural fashion? 02:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sootfur (Ki) ~ Redone
I spent an hour trying to tweak this.... it was impossible. So, I asked Scarlet if I could re-do it. I took the colors from the apprentice image. 23:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! Redden/darken the ear-pink a tad and darken the shading on the head 23:56, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink too and blur the chest shading. C: Sky Molto bene 00:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oh, btw... OA was Elo, with a tweak by Snowstorm and a nose color fix by Iceheart. 00:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone
Redone to match his warrior image. Why yes, that is a paw on the collar. Why? Because I take it to the next level. Comments? 02:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? The paw is a neat little touch. <3 Sky Molto bene 02:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The white on the tail looks pure white. Even if it is not, could you add a little shading to the furry part on the bottom? 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

As much as I love the adorable little white paw on it, his collar needs to be removed. He was shown without one, and as far as I know, was never mentioned with one. I don't see anything else wrong though, lovely job. <3 05:42, March 12, 2012 (UTC)


 * I'd really rather keep the collar. It's possible he did what Cody did: slipped out of his collar whenever he went out. 05:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

And put it on again everytime he went back? I seriously doubt that. I'm sorry, but since we have proof he wasn't wearing a collar, I really do think it should be removed. Did it ever mention him with a collar anywhere? If not, it should be removed. Not all kittypets have to wear collars.... 06:19, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

He was never specifically mentioned without one at his house, either. And yes, cats can put collars back on. I've seen it myself. I'm keeping it. 06:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

We have no proof of that though. However, we have proof of him not wearing a collar every single time we've seen him. Remove it please. 06:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he was shown without it in both the graphic novel in the back of SD, as well as the SkyClan set...and in SD, he was shown coming right from his twoleg nest. Wouldn't that count for something? 06:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Personally I think all kittypets should have collars even if they weren't shown with one on. It shows rank, not all bloodclan cats had teeth and claws yet they are shown with them. So I think the collar should be left on. 16:12, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefang (Ki) ~ Redone
OA is Splook, and it needed to match the loner. 03:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Cute <33 05:46 Mon Mar 12

Re-uploaded. 06:16, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (W) - Tweak
Easy-peasy simple cleanup of blurred lineart. I was /really/ feeling too lazy and too tired to get my flash drive, but I think I killed all the blurryness. Oh, and if you don't know who the OA is for this...you need help XD Just kidding. The OA is in my signature =)  05:57, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, I think you got all the blurryness. Could you define the earpink though, while this is it's being tweaked anyways? o3o 06:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Ki) - Tweaked
Darn changes aren't showing..... e.e Tail needed to be bushier, and I did the same things I did on Redtail, slight eye change, color change to match, and shading redo. I had the xcf. :P OA was Goldenpaw I think with a redo by me. Comments? 15:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)