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Alder (Hunter) - For Approval
My first real charart! Took me quite a while, but I think it looks ok enough to be worth it. I hope I'm doing this right, though! SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Make sure to add this to the reservation table before continuing. ^^ And remove some of the speckles so more of the white is visible. 02:55, September 29, 2018 (UTC)

A'ight! I added it into the table~ Going to edit it now. SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Add or define eye color? (this pattern is hard, good luck and good job) Malina457 (talk) 03:13, September 29, 2018 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded Erased some speckles, and redid the eye color a little, though I'm not sure if i erased enough of the speckles. SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Friendly reminder not to align your images ^^ It's the little "|left" next to your image coding. And remove some shading/define the light on the front legs. 03:24, September 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Adjusted the shading/lighting on forelegs. SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Add a few more brown speckled areas. This isn't the easiest pattern to work with, nicely done! (sorry, I kinda really like speckled cats lmao so the insane pattern is my fault)

Reuploaded Added more brown in, is this better? SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

This looks pretty nice! I think there should be more white to match the pattern better

Reuploaded SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

This needs to be uploaded under File:Alder.hunter.png, as the template that displays images on articles is case-sensitive. ​​​​​​​

Make the eyes more of a bright green color, like the other images.  HA WK FI RE98  20:12, September 30, 2018 (UTC)

thanks for doing this after I couldent, can you define the shading? I cant tell if some of it is shading or specs. Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 04:12, October 1, 2018 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. Although the shading on the tail just below the tip could be defined and smoothed. Could you also define the brown flecks, I can't see them very well. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 04:51, October 1, 2018 (UTC)

Brighten her up, I'm seeing a lot of gray and no white. ​​​​​

Reuploaded Edited the eye color and the shading around the tail tip, working to brighten it up some now, just wanted to reupload quickly. SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

On her other chararts it looks like there's more brown speckles in a few areas, which also appear larger than what you've got here. It's looking lovely so far.

18:39, October 2, 2018 (UTC)

Should also say that the base for this is a very light gray. I'm not entirely sure what you're using here, but I don't think it's what the base should be. It kind of looks brownish-gray. ^^ ​​​​​

I see a little bit of smudged lineart along the spine towards the shoulder. No worries, it's an easy fix! :)  HA WK FI RE98  22:33, October 2, 2018 (UTC)

This is over 50% complete. I will be promoting you to an apprentice and changing this to "for approval." 22:36, October 2, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?

15:46, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

Still working. Plan to reupload today. Was just a bit busy lately. SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Reuploaded Fixed the lineart up, added in a bit more brown. Still working on the base color thing to see if I can't fix it even though some of the layers are messed up due to it acicidentally saving incorrectly. Going to see what I can do and maybe add in more brown? But a reupload for time being. SquidwardPlays 02:01, September 27, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Maybe try clumping up the brown together more in some areas so that it's really apparent. If you're confused about what I mean, look at Alder's other images.  SPO OKY FI RE  01:22, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Looking Good! Just maybe decrease the speckles so she looks less gray.jxs 00:54, October 14, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

Still working? 18:04, October 14, 2018 (UTC)

Dew Nose (Hunter) ~ For Approval
this did not turn out how I wanted it; rip Minkclaw Winter is coming. 21:59, October 4, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading Malina457 (talk) 22:27, October 4, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The black spots on her other images do not look as round and blotchy as these do. Try smuding them a bit into the fur.  SPO OKY FI RE  22:47, October 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 18:20, October 5, 2018 (UTC)

can you blur the stripes a tiny bit? I love that they are more sharm than most art I see, but they (with my wird eyes,) are hard to look at, Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:18, October 5, 2018 (UTC)

They're suppose to be sharp per this.. Can I get another opinion on that please? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 07:54, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

Hmm, it does appear the stripes in the other images seem more blurred, or maybe they're just thicker than the ones here.  SPO OKY FI RE  14:53, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

I also agree. The stripes on the other images appear slightly blurred. Not too much, though. 18:09, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

also, this may be your prefrance to do it like this, but on the others, the tail tip is white, and it looks to me, on yours, a splotch of white on the tail, it dosent reach the bottom if that makes sence. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">~RAR =^.,.^= Im spoopy kittan! 00:39, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

The shading seems off on the white tail tip and looks like it's leaking a bit. Also the stomach looks a bit flat - other than that this is cute. 06:06, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

There's no shading on the stomach.. That's because that's the shading on the tail, I used red. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 12:04, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Would you be able to at least add a small bit of shading to show depth with the fur lineart? It looks extremely flat. The stripes are also a bit softer on the kit image than they are here, and I also agree with Owlbite's comment about the tail white; it should cover the entire tail tip. ​​​​​

Re-Ups, I redid the shading. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:12, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white tail-tip, define it on the head and add some to the ears. The ears themselves wouldn't have no shading, since ears are a 3D object and there would definitely be something there to show the inner parts of the ears. Also, try and give some shape to the neck shading- I'm not really seeing any, when it should flow with the curves of the cat a little better and go up onto the top of the head with this source. ​​​​

There's also shading leaking above the shoulder. 23:26, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Cloud, could you headline what you mean on the ears? <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:50, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

I can't, since I'm honestly unsure how... but basically look at Gooseberry's hunter image for an idea, since this one uses a similar light source. You see how there's shading in the ear area? Unless that's not what you meant and I'm just stupid. ​​​

I do understand actually, the image and Patch showed me where exactly it should be. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 11:03, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, hopefully this looks better. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 11:28, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

There's shading leaking around the tail and below the chin. 13:59, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 13:16, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail and face a bit. 23:05, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 14:50, October 10, 2018 (UTC)

Possibly make the eyes a bit lighter?

14:55, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 18:22, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

Make the black spots a bit darker, I'm not sure if I can see them.jxs 00:57, October 14, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

smooth out your shading a lot

I think the black spots are fine as I was just told to lighten and smooth them. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  04:07, October 14, 2018 (UTC)

Lioneye (Unknown) - For Approval
Finally done with midterms -_- <span style="">21:25 Mon Oct 8

Eek mine are next week D: This is a gorgeous charart! Could you maybe smooth out the shading from the shoulder to the haunch?  SPO OKY FI RE  21:38, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Could you add some more stripes across the lower chest floof? 23:00, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Can you... um... define the shading on the back paw closest to us? Its so hard to fine somthing for you to fix! its just so good!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">~RAR =^.,.^= Im spoopy kittan! 00:59, October 10, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading across the main body and the top of the haunch? <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 14:30, October 10, 2018 (UTC)

Is that waste I see? On the back? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">~RAR =^.,.^= Im spoopy kittan! 02:55, October 13, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not seeing any waste. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 04:54, October 13, 2018 (UTC)

Lessen the shading on her neck.jxs 00:59, October 14, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

Dew Nose 2 (Hunter) - Declined


Someone else has already made charart for her, but I’ll still submit my own entry.

Konata Kagami (talk) 14:23, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

I'm afraid that's not how this project works. One user reserves a charart and they post the image on the approval page and make improvements on it until it is approved, or declined (only then can another user can take over!) There are no entries by other users, as an image can only be reserved by one user at a time. No worries, you'll get the hang of it!  SPO OKY FI RE  14:27, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

Declined since someone is already working on this. Hawk already explained, but if you're still lost, check out the guidelines.

14:54, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

Konata, you may have been confused when I said "you can do Dew Nose." I meant that for my charart contest, you could submit your own version of Dew Nose, but not on PCA. 17:34, October 12, 2018 (UTC)