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Bluestar (W) - Redone
So, I re-did the image, and I am sorry, but I do not know who made the image before. I wasn't sure if I should add the scar, so please tell me if I should. εСћб ђэάѓτ  11:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

i think should not cause was it seen on her leader or older warrior image? otherwise this is really good apart from the shading under the neck that i think is supposed to be there but i dont know  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 12:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading, ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I darkened the shading and blurred the highlights. εСћб ђэάѓτ  16:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but perhaps make the ear pink a bit bigger? insane brick'd 16:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto insane. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made ear pink bigger. How's it now? εСћб ђэάѓτ  17:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading needs serious blurring. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   18:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Is it okay? εСћб ђэάѓτ  18:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. The blue is a little dark--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit, she looks very dark compared to her other images Night  Fall 18:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

She's supposed to have a silver tinged muzzle and tail tip.XxdovesongXX 07:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

She only had the silver muzzle and tipped tail because she was getting old. I don't think it's needed on her warrior image, because she is still young--  Night s h i n e    ~  07:21, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made her lighter. εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading the back leg. ♥Ice shine★  15:59, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It could still be lightened more. I think the colour should be similar to her kit and apprentice images--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:30, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit too bright, try desaturating it some Night  Fall 17:10, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad, and make the muzzle silver. Dawny  19:40, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add the silver tipped tail? Mõŏń    ۞   03:59, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was after she got old Night  Fall 06:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

blur haunch shading. ♥Ice shine★  14:52, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink just doesn't seem right for this colour pelt. Perhaps take it from another blue-ish cat with a more natural colour. Maybe Mistystar? -- Sandy star 19:56, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I changed the earpink to look more like Mistystar's, I blurred as much as I could, and I desaturated it. I didn't add the silver tipped muzzle and tail because that was when she got older. εСћб ђэάѓτ  12:32, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

She's should be more of a gray color. Darkhallows... Mew? 18:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree with Shady; she needs to match the colour of her other images. Using the desaturate tool should do the trick and then redo the ear pink and eye colour. -- Sandy star 08:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Darken the shading ♥Ice  storm★  12:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree with Darhollows. Rubyblaze 19:01, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree as well, she looks very, very blue. It doesn't match her other images, really.XxdovesongXX 21:38, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is too blue, and very bad


 * Fluffybunnies, two things. 1] Please remember to sign with ~ . 2]'very bad' is not a helpful or constructive comment. If you think it is very bad then you need to give some help for the improvement of the image.
 * Echoheart, this image is not very bad at all, just follow the advice everyone has given. -- Sandy star 22:27, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy, Echo; I think your shading technique is absolutely beautiful Night  Fall 23:50, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Fluffybunnies, this this art is not bad, and believe it or not, some cats actually are blue like this. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 09:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Just do what is listed above and this will look great. I love your shading! --Willo wwh isp 16:11, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks to all of the people who said great things about my art :) Anyway, I tried to make it more gray, but I don't think it worked. Comments? εСћб  ђэάѓτ  17:29, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

You need to desaturate it some more. Other then that it's lovely. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:26, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, maybe you should add a scar on her shoulder too. Or should that only be on her leader image? Night Fall 05:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

She seems a bit purple to me, I think you should add a silver tint to it. Just my opinion though. :] Frostheart  ♥  20:16, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think she seems very blue. But if that's what everyone is looking for, then I see nothing wrong with the colour of her pelt. But I do agree with the silver tint tip. Also, could I recommened a little shading on her head? Out of my way, Kittypet! I'm not in the mood! 20:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

No silver, I think just desaturating it would do the trick. =) W    a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   21:16, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to be gone for at least five days for vacation, so please don't decline if it's possible. εСћб ђэάѓτ  14:52, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Try using the sponge tool to desaturate it. If it makes it MORE saturated, then change it's settings to make sure it does saturate it. This is good, though! Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 16:12, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Gah, this sucks. Comments and/or critique?--Shaf Girl  23:21, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:23, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and darken the shading-- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:25, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear fathest from us a bit.  Dawny  23:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken it, and blur it. Add shading to the head. ♥Ice shine★  00:01, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ah noes... the <3 colour is being lost by the removal of the shading. Definitely darken it and thicken it. The original shading was the right colour, just needed extending to other areas. -- Sandy star 08:38, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I completely redid it.--Shaf Girl  17:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   19:36, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the muzzle and tail. ♥Ice storm★  12:11, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little.  Dawny  05:55, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl  23:06, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. --Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp 16:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading some more. Night Fall 05:23, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more shading on the nearest ear, perhaps? <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">Out of my way, Kittypet! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">I'm not in the mood! 14:12, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  17:44, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too noticeable. Frostheart ♥  20:17, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shading can be a handful you might need to make it thinner but not to thin just enough to make it more natural but dont put the whole circle on there it will look dark maybe set the exposure to at least 47 or 48 so it is not as dark then blur itTry that  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 00:58, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

And make sure that the hardness of the brush is around 50 or lower, it gives it a more natural look. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   14:02, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:24, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Q) - Redone
Bleh. I doooooon't like this image. Good news: My tap number in a national comettion got third overall in the Pre-Teen Group :) Influx Lennon -   Ringo's Wife  23:22, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading a bit. Make it a bit more sandy coloured, it looks a bit pink right now-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  02:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more stripes-- ♥Ice storm★  12:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I I add anymore stripes, it won't look like Sandstorm anymore. I (think) I added the amount she has on her warrior image. Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  13:17, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more reddish.  Dawny  21:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

She's too dark. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Maybe lighten her a bit? -- Sky Dawn Light... 23:16, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

define the ear pink more. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;backround:lime;border:1px solid -moz-border-radius: 1em; color:purple;">MOSSLEAP:)

Define the stripes on her tail and forearms more.  Dawny  05:58, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

It may be just my screen, but she looks kinda pinkish to me. -- Sky Dawn Light... 20:15, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe it's your screen. She looks beautiful to me. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  10:25, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''This fails.... Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  12:07, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try blurring the stripes and it does not fail :P  Fuzz  Leader of loners 16:33, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes need to be evenly blurred, they are too blurred in some places. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   21:09, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Mousetalon.Rubyblaze 01:42, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the tail  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:04, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandy. I fixed up the shading and added some highlights. I also made the white chest smaller-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:30, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:32, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:46, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make the ear pink smaller. ♥Ice storm★  19:55, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I needs to be blurred. And the ear pink is .... to purple.21:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC) Darkhallows... Mew?

The earpink doesn't look purple to me. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  21:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blure the highlights more. - <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:red; Background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp   22:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened shading a bit, fixed highlights, and fixed ear pink a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:08, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

darken the highlights some. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:10, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need some blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   00:19, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:01, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur white transition. ♥Ice storm★  02:16, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:54, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the highlights are really bothering me. They're too bright and concentrated, and they don't look real, no offense. Make them more like Sloefur's or similar to that, if you can. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:41, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are blotchy-looking Tawny SMEASH 22:28, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I switched to my other computer to see if this would look different than on my laptop, and it did. I tried fixing up the highlights more-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:41, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions Night  Fall 00:44, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Since Nightshine is away at camp, I could take this over, unless anyone else is willing. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   03:15, July 17, 2010 (UTC)


 * You can if you want to although I don't doing it if you don't. The shading/highlights need blending. -- Sandy star 14:04, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded. I re-did the whole thing, and just tweaked it, which one do you like better? W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:44, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * The right one the highlights are less concentrated  Fuzz  Leader of loners 16:35, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right, but blur the highlights and ear pink on it.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 01:21, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuloaded. '''Okay, goin' with the right one! Anything else? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   15:49, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 16:11, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Omg nevermind Nightfall already said Blur white transition Sorry  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 14:45, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   14:44, July 21, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blend the earpink a little more =) This is very good. -- Sandy star 13:35, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition, and add some shading to the paws Night  Fall 22:12, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar - Tweaked


Saw that this image needed to be tweaked and so I decided to do it. Had to zoom in the find the original shading so I just took it away and redid the whole shading. The white was kind of hard to do with the original creators choice of color so let me know if I need to do that some more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd darken the shading. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:00, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better but you should darken the shading Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:42, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">Out of my way, Kittypet! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">I'm not in the mood! 19:32, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur the patches a little more, because the transition is stil kinda hard, darken the shading as the others said, and there's a spot beneath his chin and to the left that cuts off. :3 Looks good though. ^-^  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 16:30, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MCA) - Tweaked
My first tweaked image. Original artist Minnowclaw. Comments? •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 13:32, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit; she looks nearly black. Otherwise good :) insane  brick'd 13:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 13:48, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

She only has one hind leg. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 20:47, July 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * That's because when this image was originally made, the injured foot was thought to not be visible from this angle; now that it's been changed and it's visible from this angle, add the hind leg again.  I c e  t h r  o a t   Just a   simple   sig...


 * Lighten her just a bit more, she's still to dark. Influx Lennon -   Ringo's Wife  10:22, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardfoot(Q)-Tweaked
Original artist was Spottedwing. I thickened the shading and added a few highlights. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:26, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink if it isn't blurred enough already  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 12:03, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the right eye a bit lighter. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  12:51, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Her right or our right? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  14:28, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, her right. XD <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  12:25, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  12:20, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the nose black? Black cats typically have black noses Night  Fall 20:58, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Dark gray nose. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash'''  23:22, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great. :3  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:48, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Purdy - Redone
Okay, on the Nominations Page, it said his style needed to be re-done. So here he is. Original artist was me. ♥Ice storm★  00:27, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pinkish.  Dawny  00:36, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

You mean, lighten it? ♥Ice storm★  01:19, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

No, just define it, because it's blurred too much. I think that it will be the right pink once it's defined.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 01:33, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Ki) - Tweaked
The original artist was Minnowclaw. I changed it to longhair for the bushy tail and to match the deputy image. Comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 03:58, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is a very good image Icethroat, maybe blur the shading some more and darken the ear pink. Also, the white stomach looks a bit grey on the right side (when looking at the image). -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 10:41, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty pretty! XD Blur the white transitions a smidge. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   13:29, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I blurred the white transition, darkened the ear pink, and blurred the shading.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 18:53, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad. Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  10:20, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 19:45, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) - Redone
The original artist was Echopaw, I believe. The shading needed fixing and the colour lightening. After trying this I ended up redoing the whole image. -- Sandy star 15:22, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Very good, Sandy! I can't see anything wrong! <span style="color:Red; font family:Chalkduster; background:Black; border:5px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Saffron;">Tawny HEAT WAVE!! 16:10, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Extremely beautiful. =) The only thing I see is to shade the back leg furthest from us, as that would be shielded from the light source and would be darker than the rest of the shading. Other than, perfect. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 16:36, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandy star 20:04, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a bit hard to see. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 11:04, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little big Rainear   May Starclan light your path

Reuploaded -- Sandy star 11:20, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Dawncloud (Q) Tweaked
The orinal artist was either Sandy or Bramble; sorry, I'm not exactly sure. Anyway, I desaturated and darkened her to make her look more like her other images. I also changed the eye style because she looked cross-eyed before xD Comments? Night Fall 22:04, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

It was Bramble. :) Make the shading darker. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 10:51, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Cool :) Darkened shading Night  Fall 20:56, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur stripes a little more  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:07, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, I kind of like the way they are...any other opinions on this? Night Fall 22:11, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose (Ki) Redone
Original artist was Firepelt. I had to redo him, the shading was a bit messy and I had to change the color completely. Comments? Night Fall 22:04, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on <-- side. ♥Ice storm★  22:49, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the paws.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 23:03, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I fixed the blurred lineart. Ice, that's where the light source is coming from ;) Night  Fall 02:58, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

This doesn't look quite the same colour as the other two images; it's a little too dark so perhaps lighten the pelt colour a litle. 13:39, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Was his tail cut off as a kit?  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:07, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, it's the exact same color as his other images, I took the color directly from his warrior image. I think it's the shading that makes him look dark. As for the tail, I don't really know if I should make his tail a stump...when it was first done, the tail wasn't stumpy. He was older when he lost his tail, what do you guys think? Night Fall 22:11, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I thought that maybe we could have one with the full tail and an alternate image with his tail a stump, just like we have other alternate images for other things. But if only one, then I'd probably say to have his tail normal size. Also, since the shading makes the image look too dark, lighten the entire image a little bit.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 00:46, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Redone


Ended up having to redo this one as there was no way to save the shading. The original version was made by Sparrowsong. I made it as similar as I could to the last one, added adequate shading and highlights, and added a stripe on the face. Further suggestions? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 01:11, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good! Maybe blur the shading on the leg. =) W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   02:19, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't know which leg you meant, so I just did them both. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 02:29, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add the scar on his flank? You don't need to; we could just say it's on the other side :D Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  02:31, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I know he's described as 'golden brown' in the allegiances and a few times in the series, but he's been described as ginger a lot more; should we maybe make his image ginger instead of golden brown? Night Fall 22:55, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

It's awesome, Bramble! I think you should add a scar to the flank, and add some more stripes to the tail. ♥Ice storm★  02:23, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Crowfeather (W) - Redone
The original artist was Shimmerpool. He was down for work on the shading and highlights but I found it impossible to blend them enough for them to look smooth, and given that the earpink was rather large and messy as well I have redone the image. -- Sandy star 13:33, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I gave up on tweaking him because I couldn't get it without blurring the lineart. xP I think he looks great. :3  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:48, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit lighter. It looks black rather than almost black. Make the base color more like, say, Yellowfang's shadows. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 20:55, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, Sandy! This is awesome, I'd say to blur the ear pink a bit. ♥Ice storm★  02:22, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Sandy star 09:36, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandstar12. I added the bushy tail. Comments? Mõŏń    ۞   15:04, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks kind of strange... Try making him longhaired like his kit image and it'll look great. :3  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:50, July 22, 2010 (UTC)


 * The original artist was not me... I just reuploaded the image when renaming it last year. I don't quite remember who it was without looking it up in the archives (which I don't have time to do right now - I will later). I think this image just needs the longhaired blank as Mumble says, rather than messing with the lineart. -- Sandy star 15:55, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

The original artist was a user called Sandiwolf, who left a while back. You did a nice job on altering the tail lineart, but I agree with the others you can just change it to the longhaired version. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 21:55, July 22, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blur the ear pink. ♥Ice  storm★  02:21, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Was it really neccessary to alter the lineart? Hmm, I think you should also add the fluffy chest stuff, since the rest of his images do now.XxdovesongXX 20:58, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * It was neccessary to alter it, and I really like how it looks, But maybe JUST add the bushy tail? I think it looks awesome. W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   22:34, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Flametail (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Bramble. I changed the pelt color for consistancy and made him longhaired. Comments? Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   17:01, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tiny bit bigger  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:09, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done. Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   17:15, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should make the ear pink a little bit darker, it's sort of hard to see.

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I think the shading is fine, I think it just needs a bit of lightening. ♥Ice storm★  02:21, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done. Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   14:40, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

joining the project
whom it my concern

I think it concerns bramble but hey this is cinderpelt123 i am asking if i can join the charart project as an apprentice

Thanks :) Cinderpelt123 17:19, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

H Cinderpelt. I'll add you in right away. These links can help you: here and here. As Tweak Week is currently in progress, new members are not allowed to post up art, but you can always critique on other images for the time being. Thanks for your interest in joining! --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 21:23, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Snowbird (Q) - Redone
I can't find the original user, sorry. :/ The only Google results I got were for her warrior image. Anyway, she needed green eyes, but the shading was really weird - white with grey shadows, rather than pale grey with grey shadows and white highlights - and the nose and ear pink were really unnatural, so I redid her. Suggestions? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 22:21, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Original artist was Sandwich989 - though for some reason the warrior version was in place of the queen one, so no wonder you couldn't find it. =) The image is lovely. I see nothing wrong. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 22:50, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. She's beautiful. :D  Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   23:17, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

I seem to keep getting Sandwich989 and Firepelt's images for some reason. xD -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 23:21, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

lol xD She's absolutely gorgeous Golden, nice job :) Night  Fall 23:24, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I see nothing wrong. ♥Ice storm★  02:17, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a second... '''Three people reserved her on the same day?! O.O '''Lemme check the times... The image looks great though. :3  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:52, July 23, 2010 (UTC)


 * Checked the page's history, and it looks to me like I reserved her, then Goldenpaw, then you. :/ Correct me if I'm wrong...  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:55, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Only two people reserved this image. I reserver her warrior image if thats what threw you off. Also am I the you? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  17:53, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry if you reserved it first. That's my fault. xD Though, the nominations page should have something that tells us if an image has been reserved or not. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 19:01, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Because Bramble and I really have time to change the nominations page every time someone changes their current projects... seriously; just use your eyes and double check. And if that's too hard then use ctrl+f and search it. Sarcasm and annoyance over. For this image: It looks fine and even if someone else has reserved her first I see no point in scrapping this for the sake of some petty argument. Comments before approval? (as this is a redone image) -- Sandy star 21:50, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

No, you barely seem to have time to change them when a tweak gets approved. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 22:05, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC) - Tweaked
The original artist was Shady, and it was nominated for too much shading. I also got rid of some blurred lineart. Comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 01:05, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tiny bit  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 01:32, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten ear pink. ♥Ice storm★  02:00, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did I darken the shading too much?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 15:37, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nope its ok :)  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:09, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it's just my computer, but it looks like the shading around the legs need a little bit more blurring :D <font color="981f1f" style="background:Gold">Cherryfur123 <sup style="line-height: 1em; "> Just stick with the script... 19:51, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think that it made too much of a difference, but I blurred the shading on the legs.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 20:59, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Brightflower (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandy. Said it had shading issues, so I fixed them, as well as fixing some blurred lineart and blurring a black patch that had no blurring at all. I also added some more shading and highlights. Comments? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   02:33, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should darken the shading a bit; it's hard to see. And there is very little shading in her eyes. She also kinda looks like she's cross-eyed. Sorry, a lot of crituque O_O Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  19:34, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Shading in her eyes? I don't think we need that...blur the patches. ♥Ice storm★  19:46, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not exactly shading, but different coloured patches so it doesn't all look the same. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  21:06, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Stormfur (A) - Tweaked
The original artist was myself. I blurred the shading and added some highlights. Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 14:28, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (W) - Tweaked
The original artist was Willowpool16. I changed the color to match her other images. Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 14:33, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me. :3  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:56, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. ♥Ice storm★  19:40, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the shading. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 21:40, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) ~ Tweaked


Original artist was Icestorm123, I believe, hope I spelled that right. I made him longhaired. I dunno if the tail stipes are right, but the tail took a while to get at least almost right. x3 Comments?  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 16:27, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

He's supposed to have blue eyes right?  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:08, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

They are blue, they're just very light. You should make it a darker shade of blue and make the earpink smaller. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  19:35, July 23, 2010 (UTC) You should also make the stripes look like his warrior and deputy images. These are too light and don't have the right design. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  20:05, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * nods* I was the original artist. Birdpaw, the eyes are blue, ice-blue in fact. I think you should darken the tail stripes a tad. ♥Ice  storm★  19:39, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Snowbird(W)- Tweaked
I'm the original artist. Added green eyes and darkened the shading a bit. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  18:03, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ravenpaw(L)-Tweaked
idunno the last one's shading seemed kinda funny o3o...hows this? --bracken-- o3o18:54, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ravenpaw wasn't on the list for Tweek Week images. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  21:31, July 23, 2010 (UTC)