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Pinestar (D) - For Approval
I love Pinestar so much. All colors from the previous deputy image, which was colorpicked from the leader one.

Nice. :) Define the shading between the shoulder and the elbow on his side? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:46, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

His haunch too, please. 19:40, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

could you smooth the shading some? — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:25, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not without being told to define it again. I think it's fine as it is.

Crookedstar (D) ~ For Approval
Best leader, best book. I'll lighten shading next upload so don't comment on that pls  12:28 Sat Jun 25 

Crop the image to the lineart, please. =P

Oops  17:47 Sat Jun 25 

There's a tiny speck of waste next to his left ear

blegh waste  21:53 Sat Jun 25 

The stripes seem a tad bit sharper on his other images.

Reups  07:44 Sun Jun 26 

The shading still seems too dark and not really matching what the base pelt looks like. The lighter arms don't match the hardness of my pattern. 03:32, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Mind erasing a bit of the shading on the right side of the neck, before the shading on the shoulder, if that makes sense? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

reups Lightened the shading and hardened the pale part on his arm, but where exactly do you mean, Jayie? Sorry.  11:10 Mon Jun 27 

The front leg's pattern still doesn't match his other images  01:27, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the blotch of shading on the haunch 04:18, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

reups  14:02 Wed Jun 29 

The front leg still doesn't match, there is a separate circular pattern on the front leg on my leader image  21:04, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Lightningtail (D) - For Approval
Don't ask me to lighten the base; it ain't happening. It matches his other three images.

Define the tail shading, I can't see it. 18:41, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the shading either needs to be darkened, or made sharper, if that makes sense, to make it stand out more. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:10, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Snaketail (FQ) (D) ~ For Approval
Ye ever wanty just wrap yersel up in tin foil nice and crozy and then jus get right inty the microwave and blow yersel up tae heck up 13:16 Sat Jun 25

Wow, this looks amazing! :D I feel like the shading needs to be a little darker/just shade a little more on the bottom of the belly and the edge of the tail? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:43, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Mistystar (D) ~ For Approval
15:28 Sat Jun 25

Smooth out the shading and maybe thin it out on the paws. 00:50, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Erase some of the shading at the front of the neck. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:44, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:12 Mon Jun 27

Define the shading on her shoulder and the back of the head and fill the ear-pink a bit more on the ear closest to us 04:17, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:01 Wed Jun 29

smooth out the shading on the neck and front leg some — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:26, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:56 Wed Jun 29

Milkfur (WC) - CBA
Comments? 16:33, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Crop the image to the lineart, please. Also possibly smooth out the shading, and I think it might be leaking by the haunch/stomach area, but I'm not entirely sure if that's true or if it's my eyes.

Reuploaded. 17:13, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading please?  07:47 Sun Jun 26 

Reuploaded. The whole tail was pretty much in the shading, so I defined the light. 13:41, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more. 14:49, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Erase some of the shading on the middle of the belly and on the front of the hip? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:03, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:45, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, smooth the shading transition on the belly and haunch, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink 04:15, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:19, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Mudclaw (WC) (D) - For Approval
Love. 22:15 Sat Jun 25

I highly doubt you'll need and/or want it, but would you like the file for the StarClan image? Not sure what good it'll do, but I figure I'll offer it anyways.

I will maybe have to take you up on that...I feel like the colors I have are a little bit off but I'm not exactly sure if that's because I don't have my glasses on right now or they really are. <span style="">03:18 Sun Jun 26

Define the shading more on the face and the right side of the belly? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:05, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

I'll get this uploaded hopefully today before work. If not I will get it tomorrow. <span style="">14:31 Tue Jun 28

Reuploaded Okay I have the exact colors now lol. Although I may have to mess with the shading cause a lot of you might think it is too dark. <span style="">18:29 Wed Jun 29

Firestar (D) - For Approval
Um ... I would really like some advice on this ... please. I'm so sorry, I tried but I just don't even. 23:14, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Add more stripes  <span style="">07:46 Sun Jun 26 

The pale chest seems a bit hard-edged; could you smudge/blur it a little? <span style="">17:54 Sun Jun 26

Re-uploaded: I think I messed up the stripes. Should I redo them? 18:44, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the other images are a little thicker, and on the belly make them follow the curve of the belly more rather than being straight? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:06, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

the stripes on his other images are also more orange and not as dark. 07:05, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:41, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

I think they could be thickened just a little more and sofetened a little bit, colour's much better. 21:12, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thanks trolly :) 15:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (D) - For Approval
I'd also like advice for this. 23:51, June 25, 2016 (UTC)

Make her tail bigger and fluffier. Can't tell the difference between it and the regular tails rn. This looks really nice though, tbh. <span style="">23:54 Sat Jun 25

Re-uploaded: Thanks berry! 04:28, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a tad bit more and make the tail fur a tad longer close to the tip, maybe? I can redline the lines if you need.  <span style="">07:45 Sun Jun 26 

Re-uploaded: 18:45, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the color a little too dull compared to the other images? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:08, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the tail, and give it a bit more 'fluff', to put it that way? <span style="">05:37 Mon Jun 27

Re-uploaded: 19:41, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

You should make the tail have more stripes.  ~ Silver Cloud ~   01:50, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Erm, there are several of them and I made them match the older deputy. I'd like another opinion on that. 14:34, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

the tip of her tail should be coloured in at least. (I think) 21:12, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think you need more tail stripes, just thicken a couple of them toward the middle so they don't look quite as uniform 04:14, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Sorry I can't really get tail stripes right. 15:30, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Bluestar (D) - For Approval
Had trouble with the eyes, I'll redo them in the next upload, be nice if I did something wrong. --Gardenglaze 02:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

ear should be ripped. 02:30, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please reupload under File:Bluestar.deputy.png? Your original file has two .png's, so I renamed it, but please upload under this file name. 03:00, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure velvetmoon has already got this reserved. 03:20, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I should quit this and let velvetmoon take over? --Gardenglaze 04:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I apologise if this offends anyone. But I do have both Bluestar and Oakheart reserved. I will be posting the images soon. 15:05, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Upload thought I would just upload on this. 20:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading. 21:19, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe give it a little more depth towards the base of the tail? Some volume, so to speak? <span style="">22:49 Mon Jun 27

crop this to the lineart. 21:11, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make sure it consistently fills the area 04:13, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Got it to look better with smudged shading though I'm not 100% sure I like it. 12:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 12:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the butt please?  <span style="">18:42 Wed Jun 29 

Reupload butt shading has been expanded! :) 10:21, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Oakheart (D) - For Approval
This time I used MS paint to do the eyes so they don't look like crap. --Gardenglaze 05:13, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I'm fairly sure Velvet holds the reservation on this one as well

I hope nobody has Stonefur reserved. --Gardenglaze 19:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

Where should I post mine? Should I just take over or wait for this to be archived. 16:20, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Upload I know I need to smooth out the shading will fix next upload. 20:10, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload fixed the shading a bit. 10:30, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Whitestorm (D) - CBA
<span style="">22:49 Sun Jun 26

Base is pure white. Also define the shading on both front legs.

Smooth out the shading a bit. 14:48, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't this have the longhaired blank? <span style="">17:21 Sun Jun 26

Re-uploaded I'll fix the cropping next upload. <span style="">17:51 Sun Jun 26

Darken the shading on the face? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:10, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">16:38 Mon Jun 27

Smooth out the shading on the shoulder. <span style="">22:50 Mon Jun 27

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:02 Wed Jun 29

CBA?

Stonefur (D) - Declined
Let me guess, Velvet has this one reserved as well? --Gardenglaze 19:41, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

No, but you should have it reserved on the reservation table, if you want to do this image. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:12, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

No date on the table/reservation, despite being asked to do so. Declining.

Daisyheart (D) - CBA
06:34, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading, please?  <span style="">11:51 Mon Jun 27 

Re-uploaded 01:52, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on both front legs. 12:40, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading overall, I cant even see it — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Do you think you could define the light source too? Nevermind. <span style="">18:51 Wed Jun 29

Re-uploaded 04:53, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Graystripe (D) - CBA


Define and darken the shading; I'm having a rough time seeing it.

Re-uploaded ~

CBA?

Heatherstar (D) ~ For Approval
Well, this seems horrible. It's been a while, and yes, I'll lighten the shading on the next upload 15:51, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 21:46, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 11:44, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Mudpuddle (D) ~ for approval
I love fur texture --Cheetahfur (talk) 17:47, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Ooooh, this is good. Could you define the light on the hind leg, please?  <span style="">18:23 Mon Jun 27 

Reuploaded --Cheetahfur (talk) 18:28, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

define the shading a little. 21:09, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Rowanstar (BS) (D) - For Approval
I can't even remember the last time I did charart. Pretty happy with this. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:35, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I realized I had miscalculated where the front of the leg was. :P Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:18, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading a bit? <span style="">13:20 Tue Jun 28

Greeneyes (D) - For Approval
all she ever wanted was the world <span style="">23:02 Mon Jun 27

define the shading on the legs and tail. 21:08, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

^And on the face, please  <span style="">14:29 Wed Jun 29 

Gorsefoot (D) - For Approval
21:27, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

define tail shading please — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:31, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried. 20:09, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (D) - For Approval
21:27, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt D) ~ For Approval
blue's a nice colour 11:44, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Does this actually need to be redone on the new blank? The old alt image isn't in use and I believe it was decided that this alt was invalid because it's for official art where we don't know which rank the cat is in. 12:52, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

I wasn't actually too sure myself, but I went and reserved it anyway because this one was on the charart list - I wasn't sure if it was warranted or not. But I'll happily accept that it's declined if that's the case. 13:19, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

It's really blue, if it isn't declined, maybe lighten the blue some — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:32, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) - For Approval
I will fix the shoulder/neck shading in a few minutes. <span style="">18:25 Wed Jun 29

Sloefur (D) ~ For Approval
I actually hate this 20:27, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define/darken the shading? I'm having trouble seeing it. <span style="">12:48 Thu Jun 30

Re-uploaded didn't darken/define it too much but I can if need be 14:02, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Runningnose (D) - For Approval
lol whats art <span style="">00:35, 06/30/2016

Redtail (D) ~ For Approval
Nope, that's not texture. That's just the way I shaded it.  <span style="">14:28 Thu Jun 30