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Egg (Lo) ~ For approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlights and blur them ,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o ☺~L e a f y ~  ☺ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less flat; It looks like there are only highlights. 02:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Start to do all thing please "Expand the highlights and blur them", right? ,16:58,February 6,2012 (UTC)

His hind leg doesn't look completely shaded, the one on <-- that side. :3 22:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafstorm, I did expand the highlights and blur them. I always do everything the people tell me to =3 And I just realized the shading needs to be blurred... ☺~L e a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 02:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think that shading is too heavy.

Cheshire, you should be specific. Where is the shading too heavy? Honestly, I think the highlights could be blurred a little more, and blended with the shading more. Right now, you can clearly tell where the shading/highlights meet. When I use them (rare, but I still use 'em now =P), I try and make them flow together. 17:43, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk* I made this such a fail >.< 14:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

He's kinda starting to look an off-white ish color. Why don't you ask Mistypebble, the artist of Egg's apprentice image, for the pelt color? She probably still has the original file. 04:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, are you still working on this? 23:00, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the hauche shading. <span style="">01:23, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

D= Yes, I'm still working. I couldn't get on yesterday, sorry =( 11:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's about time <3 12:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his ears and head, and lighten and blur the shading. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't believe no one noticed he needed a torn ear... 16:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more thick and blur the shadings more. 18:47, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, do you mean thicken the line-art on the torn ear or make the torn ear go down deeper? 20:03, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should go back up with the ear, but just cut dont like a "v". This cut sorta looks like a "u". Sorry if that made now sense whatsoever Also could you blur the shading a bit? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on it Leafy? 19:51, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm... I didn't know, so I just thickened the line-art with what Leafstorm said (does that make sense?) Oh, Re-uploaded 20:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You thickened it a bit too much hun. Just remove the top layer of pixels and that should be good. ( I think) And smoothen out the shading more, so it doesn't look like it has a green tint. 00:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart from the top of the torn ear. 03:01, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading C: -- Fenris  They know what I am;  let them come,  if they have the courage. 01:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait =( 15:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of all of that waste. 18:32, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o3o I always forget about the stupid waste Dx 19:13, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tad bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  22:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look a tad insane... What color did you shade with? It looks kinda greenish... 03:22, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the shading and blur it, and make the nick in the ear smaller like the apprentice image. 05:03, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs, and I'm pretty sure his nicked ear should look more V shaped. 11:24, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nick in the ear more the same size as the one on the apprentice charart. He was an apprentice after being a loner, I doubt the split would have shrunk over time. 17:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

It's been four weeks since this was first posted. Should this be declined? 02:47, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

It should. I'll take over. 02:48, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:45, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a tad neon. 20:05, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  11:20, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :3 18:27, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more, well, pink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:22, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Saturating it more will probably just make someone comment that it looks to neon... 03:10, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink a little moar? c: 03:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:13, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him a little less yellow? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  07:03, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 00:00, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:16, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I might have been seeing ghe wrong version with that yellow comment, and maybe I still am, but his eyes should be blue. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  02:04, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:38, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink like one click more? 05:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:47, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

This is just a tad bit darker then the apprentice image. Why not try taking the dodge tool over the base pelt color ever so slightly? Other then that, this is perfect. 01:03, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:30, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 18:32 Sun Mar 11

Sorry but the shading looks like it could be blurred more. The eyes also don't look the same color to me, but it could just be me. 17:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah..the eyes look a little darker. 20:07, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Alt.A) ~ CBA
He was described as a fluffy gray cat. Comments? 17:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and define the shoulder shading. 17:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose a darker shade of gray unless he was said to have a pink nose. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 17:58, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it to the max. 18:45, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to all the belly and chest. <span style="">07:38, 22, 02, 2012

Reuploaded  I redid the shading, and I kinda like it better than the first. 13:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽  19:55, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 17:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading on the haunch a little less sharp-edged. If you know what I mean. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  23:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:57, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Where's your light coming from? The body says from the left but the face says the right. I'd say move the shading on the face to the other side and blur it a lot, and it should be ready for CBA then. 17:33, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. Sunny frost  21:54, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

There isn't any shading on the right except Shelly. 22:16, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and blur the haunch shading. 22:07 Sun Mar 4

Please work on this or it will be declined. 08:27, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:09, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and I think there is waste, it might just be my eyes. 21:35, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's no waste. 8D 22:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yup I agree with Skye. Now I think the shading on the back could be blured a little bit more. Maybe darken the shading on the face while lightening it by the tail. Too confusing? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   22:42, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur ze haunch shading plz (Chatspeak bad x.x) <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke  07:01, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the earpink. 16:28, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

What's your light source? It seems to be coming from all over the place. 00:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to have to withdraw (Sounds familiar coming from me doesn't it?) the shading is making everything difficult for this image 8c. 12:11, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Silver, may I take it then? 20:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask; just remember to reserve it. 01:01, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Im always asking :-), so I dont want to steal someones work, so I have done new charart, reuploaded  13:24, March 9, 2012

Make the earpink stand out more from the pelt. <span style="">00:11, 10, 03, 2012

DJ, the ear pink is fine. In fact, I think most gray cats have gray-ish ear pink, do they not? 01:44, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, like greyish brown. Blur the belly shading a bit. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene  08:39, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:27, March 10, 2012

Maybe blur the face shading a bit? 06:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 11:30, March 12, 2012

Looks good to me. CBA? 17:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Lo) ~ For Approval
Ooh, my third loner. And the last one. >:D Comments? 20:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shoulder shading. Lovely Mooneh ^^ 22:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly thicken the lineart on the color to match with the lineart of the loner. Wonderful! :3 22:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thankies :3 22:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a little more or smudge the fur into the ear a tad? :3 22:59, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and eye depth. Looks good, Mooneh! 06:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the long wait. I lost the .pdn (the original file with layers) so I couldn't mess anything up for a while. I have the .pdn on another computer, but it's an hour's drive away. I'm trying to get the file sent to me, so, don't say anything about fixing the tail shading, because I didn't. I just defined the eye depth. :3 11:32, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink, maybe the color a bit thinner, the teeth a bit rounder (they kinda look like shark teeth) and define the shading on the neck, collar, teeth, and head. 03:06, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Scarlet, the teeth do match pixel for pixel the same as the last loner image, but, I can round them if you want me to. :3 11:39, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel of waste under his tail~ ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 14:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined tail shading, smudged pelt into earpink, and (hopefully) got rid of the waste under the tail. I lightened it, too. 22:41, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the collar thinner and straighter. 23:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the shoulder. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 00:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is still there o3o it's trapped between the hind leg farthest from us and the tail~ *stinks at explaining things* :|3 ☾ <span style="color:lightblue;font-family:Freestyle Script;background:black;border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em 3em 15em; color:white;">~Pouncey~ ☽ 03:56, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the stomach/belly. 03:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The changes aren't showing; I blurred the shading on flank/shoulder, went through every layer and got rid of waste, but I hate to say it, I can't make the collar thinner. I can re-do it if you want me to, but -cough-itwaskindofhard-cough-. 09:59, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading some and smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more....and define rhe shading on the front leg if there is any. *is shot* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 11:19, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken up the back and back leg shading because it looks like it's like, reaaaaly bright. Then blur it and the ear pink. I l0ve the collar! Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  03:38, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

I won't have the .pdn until Friday at the latest, so I won't work on it since then. Is that okay? *derp* 10:39, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, why not? Unless another senior warrior disagrees, we can wait for Friday. 17:34, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I found the .pdn 8D...I know it looks a bit darker, but...yeah. Skye helped me with the shading (fail) on join.me, so it should be good...I'll fix the collar later once I can catch Shelly or Ivy on chat. 22:41, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading..and you could just leave a message on their talk page :P 02:51, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? (Aside from the collar). 20:33, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the rogue. 21:16, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I see waste. >.> Bah, I'll fix it later. 13:20, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink~ :3 00:17, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

...It is. o3o. If I blur it more, it'll be too 'spaced', and some of the gray will show on the ear. 15:29, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind then.. :s Lower the opacity on the earpink, and there's a speck of waste at the part when his tail meet the back leg farthest from us. 15:47, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 16:05, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya lighten up or blur those blotches of darker shading on the belly and haunch? c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Gatlocke 11:18, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the collar (I hope). I can't blur that without blurring the rest of the shading along with it. Sorry, I can try to make it lighter if it helps. 21:20, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy(Did I spell that right?) blur/smudge it. 00:15, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add shading to the paw/legs farthest from us? ^^ 01:44, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the shading. There's waste everywhere, but I can't get it off. I went through every layer and deleted it...but it's still there. So if someone could do it for me, or help or something....? 11:35, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I usually open the .png file in Pixlr, and delete the waste there. You coukd try that if'n you want. :P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 11:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? (Yes, I realize the shading might be too dark). 00:09, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. In some places it's darker than the rest, make it more even if you can. <span style="">00:13, 10, 03, 2012

Shading doesn't necessarily have to be the same darkness. 00:16, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and add some shading to the tail? It makes it look funky the way it is now. xD 01:46, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and get rid of the waste. 14:48, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, too. 07:55, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Oakstep (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yay! I was browsing last night and found this! Then I resvered it today and made it in twenty minuets. Tried my best to copy it. Comments? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  01:07, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes you have now thinner and add more. Blur the earpink too. 01:08 Tue Mar 6

His elder is also lighter. No just highlights, but all over. Breeze whisker  05:03, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't lighten it too much because I got the colors from the elder. Also I added a stripe or two and thinned almost all of the stripes. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  00:21, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  02:08, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes more "zig-zaggy" like the elder's image, and darken the overall shading. 03:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

The tail needs seven stripes, and you have five. Try thinning out the ones you already have, and add a few more in so it matches. 04:51, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Two hours....Two /hours!/ please...be nice to Sandy...  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave!  22:58, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the pelt into the earpink more, mainly the sides of it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 11:41, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The ear pink might not look much different, but it is. And the changes might not be showing too. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  22:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes really don't match. Take a closer look at the elder and try to copy that. 22:01, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Okay I'm working on a new onE right now. The earliest I can do is Sunday, since I have a girl scout thing at the Mall of America. All weekend long baby! Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!

Define and blur the shading. 19:38, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Misty, I'm redo-ing it so...no. Also I just finished the tail! I know I'm /really/ slow but there's about...13 more tests this week and one more tomorrow on monday. I /am/ going to work hard on this as much as I can but this is just a progress report. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   21:31, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Alt Lo) - CBA
Kay, got this bad boy done and I must say, I'm pretty happy with how he came out. In Long Shadows, I'm pretty sure he was considered a loner in it, and we agreed the Long Shadows cover counts. Comments for improvement? 16:14, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. :3 19:49, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on his belly a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:16, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the poor kitty~ =3 02:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the waste? I don't see any. Hm... smudge the pelt up into the earpink just a tad. Looks great :) 02:25, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste. It's around the top of his back, under his chin, around his paws, towards the bottom under his tail, above his shoulders...~ :3 11:20, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I honestly think since I've darkened the shading that he is too dark now. 19:22, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The waste is still there. o3o 21:27, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see it. At all. 21:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I see some~ Anyway, I know you were told to blur the belly, but, it looks more smudged on his other alts... Maybe smudge it a little more...? 22:52, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

It would help if you told me where. 17:44, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. It (the waste) is above his back, under his tail towards the far bottom, and in between his two hind legs. :3 22:02, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 00:19, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgive me if this so called "waste" is still there as I don't see it. I tried and blindly took the erase tool over the shading layers :/ 02:17, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Waste is gone :D Blur the shading a bit. 08:04, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:02, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely. <3 CBA? 18:04, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Lo) ~ For Approval


Browsing and I found a kitty I could do: Minty! I actually like this one, sort of. Comments? 02:45, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

I thought she was a rogue? 02:48, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Says she's currently a loner, and listed under the loner category: Minty Loner (see list of loners, under M) 02:54, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mmhmm. She stays. Define the shading. Not bad, Woo. 03:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. 03:14, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred line-art on the base of the tail and haunch. Also, could you define the highlights? :3 03:52, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and highlights. 04:20, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 04:36, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:43, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

...The blurred line-art on the top of the tail is still there, and it looks like some of the line-art there was deleted also. 05:04, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed. I couldn't see it that clearly though. Erk; this one matches her queen image better (toned down highlights) like? 05:25, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights if there is any, otherwise blur the shadin. C; <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 05:24, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

It just may be my computer, but I can barely see the earpink 00:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine
 * twitch* okay. Reuploaded 22:10, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think you're just looking in the wrong place. Because of which side of the ear it's on, it's really small but it's perfectly visible. It's fine. But can you blur the highlights and darken the shading? 01:02, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded er. awful. I kind of like it, though. 02:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste leaking out at the base of the tail :3 11:29, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:30, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Deleted lineart on the tail xP 15:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading a little? And there's waste along the back. 15:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Redone 15:47, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the highlights on the haunch and flank upward. Move the highlight on the shoulder more to the left and brighten it so it's the same color as the other highlights. 17:17 Sun Mar 11

There seems to be some waste above the flank and base of the tail. <span style="">01:01, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the belly shading. 07:49, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:53, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur where the pelt meets the earpink a little more? 20:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah. Reuploaded 21:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A) - For Approval
Will be blurring in a moment. 05:28, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shoulder shading <33 05:29 Thu Mar 8

There's waste above the front back paw. Could you also smudge the ear pink a tad? 05:30, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:32, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste by the top of his tail, and around his hind leg. 11:18, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  12:10, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge dat earpink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:10, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Continue badmouthing it. 23:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the tail and shoulder. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 00:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I forgot to mention the light source is from the back. 00:50, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Slightly define the shading and smudge the earpink. :3 <span style="">00:16, 10, 03, 2012

There's some smudged haunch shading lineart. Tint the pelt color a bit more brown. 00:25, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eye. Wasn't this already approved? I think it was in the approved archives... 03:27, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it was in the declined archives, due to reaching the month limit. 06:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. A) ~ CBA
W00t Ivypool. Comments? 06:27 Thu Mar 8

Lighten the shading on the back ear. 8D 06:28, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D 06:35 Thu Mar 8

Blur the back shading/highlight/thing. Bleh, I liked Ivypool when she wasn't spying. >.> <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 06:57, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda mottled. Can you lessen the furry effect just a tad so shhhe looks solid? Define the earpink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:07, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems a tad dark. Otherwise, this is wonderful :) 19:16, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the eye colour a tad. This is stunning, like all your chararts Monuty. :-) ,20:47,March 8,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 8D Thanks so much <33 21:48 Thu Mar 8

As much as I love the furry look, she almost looks vaguely mottled.... I'm not sure how to fix it though. Maybe you could think of a way, but could you try and fix it? That's the only thing I see wrong, awesome as always mounty! <3 06:11, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that, to lessen the mottled effect, you could blur the pelt ^^ At least, that's what I think. Do that and blur the face shading, and keep being epic at charart~! 14:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Daww Thank you so much <3 I didn't blur it, but I smudged it a little and lightened it. 06:34 Sat Mar 10

Lighten the shading a little. 22:03, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:06 Sat Mar 10

Lighten up the whole image a tad. Also, try blurring the shading some more. I wanted this. >:U 03:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Me wanted Goldenflower >.< 03:40 Sun Mar 11

Could you make the eyes more green? They look blue-green right now, it's hard to tell which it is. XD 21:19, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Doh >.< 21:29 Sun Mar 11

It's still purty with green eyes, see! XD CBA? o3o 21:30, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Specklepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
First time doing this, hope I didn't mess up :

Raven, next time, sign with four "~"'s. This isn't bad, honestly. Darken and define the shading. 8D 18:59, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

And make him a male. 20:41, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Looks nice, make the ear pink less neon, maybe take it from apprentice? ,20:45,March 8,2012 (UTC)

His colour is off. Make him browner. 21:22, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his shoulder to our left and above his tail. 21:26, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I've noticed you've reuploaded quite a few times, comment that you reuploaded next time. 22:51, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a lot, blur the ear pink, and darken the shading. 23:07, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more and lower their opacity, get rid of the waste outside of the charart, and make the ear pink smaller and a bit more red. Also, when you edit the image, it's best to type Reuploaded after the last comment. And please sign with four '~ or hit the signature button. 23:27, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Thanks everyone for helping meh! :3 And I signed but I was also told I should stop signing.. Should I or shouldn't I?

No you should always sign. Who on earth told you not to? And define the speckles and dull the highlights. 00:59, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

._. I did not tell you to stop signing. I told you not to sign up there ^ because I had already put an unsigned template there and the time would be wrong. Please don't twist my words around. 01:02, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

... And I noticed you signed it again. Please don't put a signature where it says "unsigned comment". 01:04, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I'm Really Really sorry, I didn't mean to twist your words around, I didn't understand. 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Thanks again everyone, and again, really sorry Oblivion^. 01:26, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Try putting the lineart on a separate layer and putting the highlight layer below that; your highlights are making the lineart grey. 01:47, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, erased more waste. 17:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I can still see waste in the bits I mentioned before....c: 21:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Did you do what I told you to do? The lineart on his face is still grey. 21:58, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, sorry, found the waste, it should All be gone now. And Oblivion, I don't know how to do that, I went back over all of the lineart with Pure Black, so there shouldn't be any grey anymore. 23:16, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. 23:41, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights some. 00:21, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, just darkened his shading a bit, added a bit of shading in places. Tell me how it looks! =) 20:36, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and darken the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  23:02, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, I darkened, blurred some areas, tried to match his color a bit more to his apprectice image, Also for some reason I don't think its uploading the new edits on the image, When i'm re-uploading it, it says "Oops, a photo with that name already exists." I click "overwright the existing image with yours." Don't know if i'm doing something wrong. 09:26, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

That's fine, Ravensong. But I still think you need to tone down the highlights quite a bit, and center/blur the earpink. 19:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Raven, when you re-upload the image, are you adding a new image to the wiki? You should go to the existing file and click "upload a new version of this file" 20:03, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Well, I tried to tone them down, and I blurred the earpink, hope it looks okay. 20:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded '''again. ''' 20:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Whitethroat (Ki) ~ For Approval
So yeah, though I'd post it. Urgh. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 23:49, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest a bit more. 00:34, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 00:37, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Adorable! :3 Maybe add some more shading? Then again my computers colors and lightings strange. 00:41, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading is okay...but we'll see what the others be thinking too. : 3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 00:43, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Skyt this is good but can you blur it a little by the white paws and a little more on the chest?<font color="blue" face="Mistral" size="2">S <font color="green" face="Mistral" size="2">p <font color="blue" face="Mistral" size="2">o [[User talk:.Spottedclaw 01:28, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

The chest is fine. ^^; Try to smudge the paws just a little more. 01:28, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploooaded~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 01:42, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little larger. 06:37 Sat Mar 10

Maybe make the earpinks the same size (probably the same as what Mounty said up there) 14:12, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. <3 03:29, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''The earpinks are the same size now. xP <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 05:51, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I forgot to upload the file xDD I'll put it up as soon as possible. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 06:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the paws and chest more  20:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Badgerpaw (Ki) - CBA
Hooray! 8D I got another one of his images <33333 He's my favorite character ever.... XD This is actually uploaded onto my personal image from much earlier with different shading..... :P Comments? 01:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

So cute! I can't see anything wrong with it other than maybe blur the stripe along his tail a bit. :3 01:29, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

I just don't see anything wrong. Maybe just blur the chest and make the stripes darker there. I can't really see them.<font color="blue" face="Mistral" size="2">S <font color="green" face="Mistral" size="2">p <font color="blue" face="Mistral" size="2">o [[User talk:.Spottedclaw 01:30, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Aww!! Kawaii!! <333 Make the black stripes on his head a bit thicker, brighten the ear-pink a touch, and maybe smudge the chest a bit more. 04:12, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

This is adorable, Paleh! Lighten the white on his tail a smidge *steals* <3 08:08, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this Badgerpaw.kit.png. 01:40, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

He's sooo cute <3333 Make the earpink bigger. 17:10 Sun Mar 11

Reuploaded - Kay, I think I did everything.... however I'm not changing the color of the white on the tail, it's dark cause it's in the shadows and if it wasn't dark, it'd be flat :P And bah, how did I forget to change the filename before uploading? XD *fails* 21:27, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm in love with this! CBA? 04:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (Ki) ~ For Approval
Well...I just thought I'd upload it now. Comments? 08:18, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 08:25 Sun Mar 11

Define the shading plz xP <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Black" >Sky Molto bene 08:42, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Failed shading iz failed >.< 11:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. ^^; Sorry for missing that, Mounty. 12:18, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any highlights? Lighten the whole thing just a tad. 15:11, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

And make his nose grey. 18:31, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:42, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and no, there are no highlights. I'd rather keep the color the way it is, since I colorpicked from his warrior, unless someone else agrees with Woo. 07:45, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it just a little bit, so I agree with Woo XD. I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  16:54, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think there should be shading on the eyes. 20:01, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, shading placement is artist's choice. 20:08, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Rogue Blanks - For Approval
So I'm starting with him first. Comments for improvement? 00:08, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think the heel on the back legs should jut out a little more. Also, add the dew claws (optional), and the toes should also jut out a little more, a little like this. 00:30, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The back leg closest to us looks broken, move it in more. 00:38, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make a line to mark the inner ear, slope the forehead down to the muzzle a bit more, and maybe make the neck a bit longer? This is cool! :) 01:09, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you post all the blanks? And round out the front of the muzzle a bit, it's really boxy. 01:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I stand by my comment that they'd look better with claws sticking out, since they are rogues after all. It is optional, but in my eyes, it'd be better 02:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but unless they had dog claws/teeth on them (still not sure how the BC cats got them to stay on), they wouldn't be very visable... Look at them. They're small, thin, and curve in when they're out and the cat isn't sticking them into something (which causes the claws to draw out more). 02:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the back part of the neck every so slightly, and if it's a rogue, maybe make its back arched like this guy. 07:38, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also, shouldn't he be white, like the other blanks? 18:09, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

It just means the blank is transparent. It's fine, Bluestar. 20:08, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Though the other blanks are filled in with white, Cloudy. We'd have to make them transparent also if we leave this one as it is. 20:46, March 12, 2012 (UTC)