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Polly (Ki) ~ Withdrawing
Am I the only one who thinks this is bad. Sorry it took so long, school just started and they loaded us with homework. 19:00, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

I forgot the texture. ;-; 19:12, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

Soften the stripes and also the part where the M goes down should be more visible. :) 19:24, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

Updated  20:08, September 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink? 00:07, September 2, 2017 (UTC)

The right side of the image looks red, so maybe desaturate or lighten the shading a tad?

The tint itself is vastly throwing off the color. Why does everyone want to tint the shading..it's not tinted that way on the kp.

theres waste on the <-- side of tail 08:21, 9/02/2017

Updated 14:50, September 2, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps make the stripes on the chest/body a tiny bit thicker?

Define the ear pink a little bit and smooth out the shading around the muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:13, September 4, 2017 (UTC)

Withdrawing. 00:33, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Spiresight (Star) - For Approval
black kitties.

I love this charact a lot. Good job! Define the ear pink a tad and smooth out the shading possibly? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:21, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not entirely sure if I'm able to smooth out the shading anymore than this.

Shellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
How do you charart. . . lol. I'm aware the shading needs smoothing out, but I'll fix it later.

re-up I tried.

Smooth out the head shading, define the tail shading, and add some lighting to --> front leg and paw. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dovewing (Q) - For Approval
I'm proud with this! 00:47, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste outside of the <- side of the tail, and I believe the shading is leaking on the belly. Also, could you smooth out the shading? 00:57, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's also leaking on the tail, and can you define the shading on all legs?

Reuploaded The shading isn't leaking, it's just the pale parts. 01:29, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

the tint looks a bit too neon, and the shading is a bit flat. 01:30, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:00, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

still looks too neon, so maybe darken the tint 02:18, 9/05/2017

Looks nice! maybe define the shading depth and smooth it out a little? 03:39, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking on the belly. 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Mae (Ro) ~ For Approval
Let me know if I left something out. Comments? 00:52, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

she looks ginger-tinted 00:53, 9/05/2017

Reuploaded. How's this? 00:57, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face and back legs. Also, add some light to the front legs and the ears. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:34, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Fog (L) ~ For Approval
she's the leader of a rogue gang so it's enough. 00:56, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

this is cool, but wasnt she described as pale? also, prehaps define the shading a smidge 00:59, 9/05/2017

if you can come up with a cite, then add it. 01:02, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

I don't know if it's texture on there, but maybe smooth it out some and define the ear pink a tad? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Star) - For Approval
Hopefully this new cord I'm getting for my tablet helps until my new one comes. This was fun to do. Although I know the smudging is weird. I'll fix that as soon as I have a functional tablet (RIP 6 year old one) 01:21 Tue Sep 5

Define the shading on the front legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 10:36, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Pinenose (star) ~ For Approval
dont comment about the waste ill fix it soon <span style="">02:11, 9/05/2017

re-uploaded. <span style="">02:17, 9/05/2017

Sunnykit (ki) - For Approval
I didn't know what eye color to give her so now she has a blue eye and a yellow eye like her parents. i've spoiled some deaths for myself but it's fine, it's fine, i'll be okay.

Define head shading and smooth out tail shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 10:33, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (L) - For Approval
hmm.. i'm aware of the weird pixel in the tail. i'll fill it next upload. 03:36, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

theres some waste where the torn ear is <span style="">05:21, 9/05/2017

There should be no stripes on the right side of the face, according to the kit image. :) 10:29, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some. This is terrific! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 10:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Crowfeather (De) ~ For Approval
Wow.. bad dad is deputy. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

define the texture <span style="">04:36, 9/05/2017

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:41, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe make the pale parts look more... idk,, they look as if they're made with chalk on the other images, i guess? Make them rougher maybe?? If anyone else could throw in their opinion or reword what I said, that'd be great.

It might just be my laptop but maybe blur the shading on the muzzle? And perhaps tone down the tint a bit?