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Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
The patches were over-blurred in some places and shading was some-what blotchy. OA's were Sandstar, Bloo, and Leaf-storm. 19:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, you're fine. 8D Just lighten and blur the earpink. 21:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  22:23, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:24, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I dont think the changes are showing... 22:33, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest a tad. :3 23:00, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Move the highlight of the eye to match the light source and maybe make the tail tip a bit wavier? It looks kinda funny since it's just straight, but that's just my opinion. 23:59, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable/define it. 01:14, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the shading/highlight/lighter spot on his shoulder --  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the gray into the white? He's long-furred, so I think it oughta look furry. :3 03:11, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since smudging is optional and other images would have to be tweaked it if was smudged, I think it should stay as is. Could you whiten the white a little though? 06:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink, and make it more triangular. it's awfully hard to see.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:12, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 23:25, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? And, make the white more white and less gray :3 09:25, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can fix the ear pink, but the white is as white as I can possibly get it. :/ I'll be reuploading sometime tomorrow or Saturday. 23:14, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Still gotta blur that shading a bit. =P 04:48, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3  15:43, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you tone down the eyes? They look kinda neon. 17:19, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Redid the shading to help the white look more white~ 23:24, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the haunch shading. 05:37 Sun Mar 18

Reuploaded 06:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Sky Exterminate! 09:58, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Chhanges not showing 15:52, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the body just a tad. 17:20, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~

There's a leetle bit of waste above his right ear. Kill it with fire? 00:08, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ This is why i dont trust the wand tool DX 16:27, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (E) - Tweaked
I just tweaked the muzzle....OA was Thistle (who had help from 'teldy.) Comments? 01:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The line should end at the edge of her mouth and should not extend below it. 01:49, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Like this? 20:58, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shorten the mouth to end at the crease like it does on the apprentice charart. 20:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Since Twi has left PCA, any user who so wishes may take over this project. 18:55, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'll try at it... 23:18, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:33, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look any different. 14:19, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Fawnstep (MC) ~ Redone
Fail on tabby cx Well, she had to be redone because she had unrealistic stripes & the white was blotchy. OA was Hiddensun with tweaks by Rainwhisper and Bloo. 22:12, March 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * steals* This is purty. =3 Just define the eye and herb depth, and thin out the stripes at the tips. 22:19, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Sky Exterminate! 00:38, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on the chest a bit. <3 02:08, 17, 03, 2012

I think you should shrink the white on the chest, it looks too big... 02:15, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pfff Stoney this is my first try at a mackerel tabby... Dx Defined eye and herb depth, and kind of thinned out the stripes. I also defined the tail shading and blurred the chest just a tad. And Leafstrike, I think the chest is fine. 04:29, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I still think it's too big... :/. 19:21, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Leafstrike. It looks a little too large. Breeze whisker  23:23, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, this would be white shoulders, not white chest. Can you enlarge and blur the earpink? 01:49, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Weird, since I tried to copy it off like Leafpools... o3o Ah well, fixed! Changes might now be showing, though. 21:54, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, forgot to do what Paleh said xP  22:34, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

It's still the same. Are you reuploading over the correct file? 01:05, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

It won't let me upload it on my account... And yes, I'm reuploading it correctly. 19:17, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Well, that's weird, because on the file history you only uploaded once... 21:36, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I know I'm trying to reupload it, but it won't let me. 22:08, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

That's fine and all, but if you know you're having trouble reuploading, don't say you reuploaded. You've said you reuploaded 3 times and you only uploaded to original one time. If you've been having problems for that long you should ask for help instead of saying you reuploaded when you didn't. 14:08, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh I'm sorry, I tried to reupload it while in source code and I thought I did, but I guess it didn't.. But I found out the problem, sorry for the trouble. 19:20, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked


This is my first tweak, so just tell me if I'm doing something wrong.

So okayyy. I tweaked the shading and tried to make it more like her apprentice.

Comments? :3

15:35, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks almost like it is tinted brown... (sorry if its just my computer) Can you fix that? 15:46, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle you dork this is over the limit X3 16:01 Sat Mar 17

Yup, it is. xD Silly Thistle. Declined for now, you can repost when there's space. 18:52, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I archived something so you're good. 19:30 Sat Mar 17

The shading looks kind of green. When I did her apprentice, I tinted her shading slightly red, so that might help :) 23:16, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Upload it over the old file. 15:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded it over the old file, but it red tinged, and not a dork anymore. Phew. 18:25, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

In Cherrypaw's talk page, although it hasn't been put in due to lack of page numbers, I velieve ger eyes were revealed to be amber? Should the eyes be changed, or wait until a cite is in? Sky Exterminate! 01:53, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I say wait until a cite is added. If you don't mind...could you define the ear pink? 04:38, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

The light parts look tinted yellow-green. 08:33, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to define the stripes? They look very faded. Sky Exterminate! 10:02, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this thistle? 22:14, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (A) ~ Redone
OA was me, then redone with the new blanks by me, and is now being redone again by me. XD Needed to match the leader.~ File changes may not be showing yet. Comments for improvement? 16:29, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Also, when I had the image up for approval the first time, it was decided that she didn't need patchy fur, assuming that she was too young to have such fur. 16:59, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

So purdy. *u* Know this might be weird, but the tail doesn't seem to match the other images in my opinion.. Could you fix that? Dx 21:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure...It could be just the lighting. Feel free to disagree. 23:41, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

No, it doesn't look like the lighting.. The style is different (just a tad) from the warrior image. >.< Sorry, probably not making sense.. >.> 02:14, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it too. The other image's tail look darker and more...smudgified, for want of a better word. Sky Exterminate! 08:02, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't look like it's shading. o3o Move it under the shading layer? 01:52, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the missing spots on the tail with the lighter stripe color. That's what I did. 02:22 Thu Mar 22

Reuploaded. File changes may not be showing yet. 16:20, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Silverhawk (W) ~ Redone
Woot~ OA was Mintstarr, shading and highlights were flat, needed more ragged fur and it's was a triangular tabby. So yeaah... Comments?c: 16:43, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is so good *u* enlarge teh earpink. 16:51 Sun Mar 18

The shading looks somewhat flat. Can you give the shading some sort of depth? 16:57, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 17:25, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

The way the stripes blend in with th pelt doesn't look natural. Do you think you could smudge them slightly in the direction of the pelt? On the much thinner stripes, you don't even have to. This looks nice :D 21:08, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Fallow, you already have an original charart and Mousewhisker up for approval. That's the limit. This will be declined unless you want to withdraw something else. 23:44, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, what? Since when when have we been only allowed to have only one original and redo up? I have an original an two redoes up. 23:55 Mon Mar 19

Mountain's right, Scarlet. When did this become a rule? o.o 23:56, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind, Scarlet's brain fart. I thought that we swapped back when we had the apprentice redos. My apologies to you, Fallowpounce. Scarlet shouldn't take breaks from PCA because she forgets stuff *brainfarts*  23:58, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes, and maybe smudge them a bit? They're beautiful, but look really hard-edged. 09:46, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Could you tweak the lineart on the tail to look a bit less like spikes and more like fur? Sorry, I hope that didn't come out rudely... I love the pattern! 8D 18:37, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I think i accidentally made the stripes and shading darker.... *is derp* owo Fallow shouldnt be left alone with a charart for so long XD 16:31, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (A) - Tweaked
OA was Breezewhisker with the news blanks and she needed darker shading. Comments? 17:12, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 17:51, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading on the top of the far hind paw a little? Breeze whisker  14:46, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for the late upload, I'll upload it again tomorrow, sorry. 19:57, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:58, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading 01:41, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:19, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked the whiskers to be longer. I can't tweak the left whiskers because there is no more room on the image to. Comments? 22:51, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Just make the canvas bigger 23:24, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean? Aren't the whiskers at the last pixel on the image? 23:27, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

She means to increase the extra space you have. If you use GIMP or Pixlr, I believe you go to Image -> Canvas Size. 01:09, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks Leafstrike ^^ 17:50, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (L) ~ Tweaked
Paleh and I did a join.me and she told me all the patches I should remove and I'd rather not remove anymore. OA was Shimmerpool I think I can't remember. Comments? 22:53 Mon Mar 19

Could you please get rid of the facial patches? Look here. No black and white cate has extra white patches around the face in the black fur unless they have scar fur there. 23:14, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:19 Mon Mar 19

Can you make this more like his other images so they won't have to be redone? I know, I really sound like a bee with an itch >.< 00:03, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Well the thing is Ivy, the other images have most of the same problems this one had honestly..... I kinda think we should tweak them all personally, but feel free to shoot me. 00:12, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Has this just been sitting here? Could you blur the patches a little? Breeze whisker  18:00, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

I tried blurring them but it was either you couldn't see a difference or it was really really blotchy o3o 18:03 Sat Mar 24

You use Photoshop, right? You could try taking the smudge tool on a soft brush and smudging it so that it takes the sharp edges off the patches. Not really blurring, but yeah. x3 Breeze  whisker  18:17, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I did that a little on the leg but I kinda like how the chest looks right now. 18:42 Sat Mar 24

Beautiful! Please lighten the left ear pink; it is much darker in comparison to the right side. 173.74.231.143 19:31, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Oh my stars I'm an idiot..I meant the right ear pink is darker. XD 173.74.231.143 19:32, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, that's the shading. 19:33, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Iceheart and the shading was blotchy. Comments? 17:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it? I can't tell the difference between the lineart and the base color. 19:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'd personally prefer it stay this dark. Not being able to see all of the lineart isn't the end of the world. Shrewtooth is a black cat, not dark gray. 19:55, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps blur the shading's edges? Mainly the body shading. 06:27, 22, 03, 2012

Reuploaded 04:58, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights a little on the face. Breeze whisker  17:57, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (Ki) ~ Redone
So cute ^^. Skye was suggesting for me to re-do the warrior and apprentice, so the stripes are fine. Also, don't ask about the color, it's the same hex code. :3 20:31, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. XD OA's were Rainlegs, Cloudskye, with tweaks (?) by Night shine. Redone to match warrior, but...xD 20:37, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. 01:01, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:03, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define your light source? There's a highlight on <--that side of the face, yet there is a highlight/lighter spot on that--> since side of the chest/body. Sorry if that didn't make sense o3o 01:32, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink more grayish and less bright pink? 09:06, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Moss (Lo) (KP) ~ Redone
Here's Moss :D. OA was Ashshadow. er shading was blurry and the highligths were too bright. Like her Warriors merchandise collar? 23:34, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lol, nice product placement. Define the earpink? 23:37, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the light source? Define and fix the light source, as there's a "highlight" on the shoulder, but a shaded area on the flank. Also, Blur the shading, and make the nose black. -- 23:39, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's in there Shelly. Changes aren't showing. 23:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

She looks derp eyed. Fix that? XD Sky Exterminate! 01:26, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Going along with Skt, can you move the eye-highlight to match the body highlights? C: 01:40, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:35, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch and shoulder highlight? 13:31, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Lo) ~ Redone
I really hate to redo something that was so recently approved but it needed to match the other images. OA was Leafstorm. Comments? 03:55 Wed Mar 21

Blur dat body shading, bro. Sky Exterminate! 08:03, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes might not be showing. 06:45 Sat Mar 24

Archeye (W) - Redone
There's my failed attempt at a classic tabby. OA was Insane with a redo and tweak by Leaf-Storm. Comments? 20:26, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading/light source, if you can. :3 20:29, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  20:43, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

The swirls look a little blocky. Try smoothining the curves and use the smudge tool to gently smudge the fur the way the fur goes. I think that'll help some :3 21:29, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:52, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Eliminate the waste all around the tail, in the triangle space under the belly, and at the very front near his paw~ I apologize if it's just my phone being derp Also, define the highlight on the chest/shoulder a bit ^^ 03:26, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:32, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge and make the earpink less hot pink. He is not a fail. >:| Skt Dalek Caan 06:42, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:25, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Ripplestar (Le) - Redone
Meh... I was trying not to have him look so much like a tortie and try to copy Mounty's idea for Tallstar, but it didn't quite go that way.... :-/ OA was Echomist with a tweak by Iceheart. Comments? 22:48, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading c: Lovely! 23:40, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

And give him a dark grey nose. 23:46, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:47, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the black look a little brown? If it's just me, ignore this xp 18:12, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

When I was getting colors, I used this as a reference. I think it looks alright. 02:01, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

I think the pelt colors look too blurred together. Could you define them? Breeze whisker  17:54, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (W) ~ Redone
He had triangle stripes. OA's are Bracken- and Rainlegs. Skt Dalek Caan 00:07, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Epic Sky 8D lighten the stripes. 00:14 Fri Mar 23

Re-uploaded. Thanks, I wasn't quite sure how this would turn out. xP Skt Dalek Caan 00:26, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 01:24, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, Wild. Although, it could be blurred... 01:29, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm trying darker shading out, but I blurred it. Skt Dalek Caan 02:32, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Round the ear pink out a little, and blur shading ^^ 03:27, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shade of brown used for both the stripes and main pelt color could be lightened some. My own cat is a light brown tabby and is lighter than this. 17:29, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I despised the classic tabbiness, so I went with a ticked tabby instead. XD Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 07:01, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! Can you define the shading? 13:32, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbittail (W) ~ Redone
Um....fail on the tail, ew. OA ish Nightfall101. Skt Dalek Caan 00:40, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadeed. Didn't liek the shading, so I blurred it more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Dalek Caan 00:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Looks much better, Trolly. 00:52, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined earpink is defined. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Dalek Caan 00:59, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpinjk more pinky. Lovelty 8D  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 12:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow. I took over for Bloo since she left the Wiki. I played around with this a bit to make it more realistic, and upon searching for a real brown and white gray cat, I came upon a [http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_HC_iJORcmts/TGQ_yjc8BSI/AAAAAAAABNk/vYgmndHUBcc/s1600/dandeliontail.png ticked, modified tortie almost. ] The only thing I don't like about this is the patchy fur. Comments for improvement? 18:05, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and I almost forgot, there was overwhelming support for Bloo to redo this. If you really want to get technical, I can bring this to a vote on the tweak page, but do we honestly need to do that? Three people already said yes, I believe. 18:10, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the patches a little less purple and, in lieu of having an outline, just smudge them lin the same pattern? 18:35, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 19:08, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Could you also put more shades of grey or brown in it? That would make it look more realistic. Breeze whisker  17:52, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Stick (Cat) (W) - Redone
Original artist was Goldenpaw, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 18:09, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you defin the tail and haunch shading a tad? Nicely done as always :) 18:11, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the ear and erase the two single pixels that point out. (If you know what I mean). 00:12, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, too~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  04:42, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:55, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 07:04, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (A) - Redone
OAs were *Ivypool*, Icethroat, and Mountain. She needed to match her redone look, and I'm tired of it sitting around and not matching :P I guess I'm the only one brave enough to try to match Mountain's awesomeness? Anyway, comments for improvement? 18:38, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading/light source on the face. :3 00:14, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink some. <span style="">01:20, 24, 03, 2012

I didn't make the warrior, Stoney did XD Define her dapples a little more. Lovely Ivy <33 06:47 Sat Mar 24

Rabbitleap (Ki) - Redone
OA is Mossleap, and it needed to match the other images. 23:26, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Frostclaw (KP) ~ Redone
OA was Moonflight, and it had some issues with the shading. 00:04, March 25, 2012 (UTC)