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Mistystar (L) - Redone
Original artist is Mousetalon :3 Meh, I really hate this xP I'll probably darken the shading and ear pink later. 18:08, July 11, 2011 (UTC) You did take the colors off of her kit image, right? xD Blur the haunch shading. 19:10, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing :P 19:30, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Fill in the whole ear with earpink. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  20:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The whole ear doesn't always need to be filled. It's the artist's choice. But yeah, Nighty, I think you should darken the shading :3 21:37, July 11, 2011

All I can say is darken the shading and remove the spot above her ear. Also, it might just be me, but her eyes look a little unfocused. Her left eye looks like it's looking up, while the right is looking at you. 01:37, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, changes aren't showing again x3 You'll know the changes are showing when there's no smudge above the ear :P 08:33, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should fill the whole ear with ear pink,but if you dont want to I think you should at least make it triangular and not an upside-down V shape.But thats just my opinion...do what you like.Dovey Newbie! 15:27, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes filling the whole ear shouldnt be optional. The blanks designed to have the whole ear filled. 02:07, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 02:16, July 13, 2011 (UTC) As Rainwhisper said, it's the artist's choice whether or not to fill in the entire ear. Also, I've seen plenty of approved leader chararts with the ear pink not filling the entire ear. 02:41, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and im changing those right now. 02:46, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Did you darken the tail shading yet? :P 16:15, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Oh, and did you take the color off of her kit charart? that one has already been redone, so this one needs to match. 17:03, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Yep, I took them straight off the charart. Oh, and Reuploaded  23:46, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Good. =) Blur the bottom of the earpink. 01:09, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded  04:50, July 19, 2011 (UTC) It needs a grey nose.  05:03, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Lighten the highlight on the front leg.  15:49, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear part that indicates it. 02:02, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

That's optional, you don't have to do that. But make the earpink more triangular and bigger, first. Maybe smudge it a tad later. :3 15:44, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (W) - Redone
The earpink needed to be reshaped and darkend, and the orginal artist was Sparrowsong. I cleared up some blurred lineart. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  21:16, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Hmm, the earpink is too pink, and I think there's some blurred lineart on the front leg. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:38, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- there's not much I can do with the blurred lineart without redoing the whole image. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  00:21, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or the tail stripes darker than the rest of the stripes? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 19:04, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes touch the lineart, and I noticed that you used the spray paint can to do the stripes, but to keep that from happening, you should put the stripes on with a pencil and blur it at 100%. You could try smudging those circles into her pelt, but I dunno if it'll help :/ 00:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

I took the original image and just tweaked the earpink. I didn't make a whole new image. Anyways, it wasn't on the list to have a makeover, but with all the blurred lineart, it looks bad. Should I leave it as it is, or remake it? Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Probably remake it. Otherwise it would be hard to fix the blurred lineart. 15:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- is it just me, or is the earpink really pink? Mintstar  This time for Africa!  01:32, July 14, 2011 (UTC) It kind of is. I think the stripes are too dark... 16:34, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- does it look okay without highlights? Mintstar  This time for Africa!  01:33, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like the queen's version. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  19:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- I know the stripes are blue-gray, but that's what they were on the queen version. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  23:22, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Add one more stripe on the tail. Love it! ^^ Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 16:50, July 17, 2011 (UTC) I like how you redid the stripes. Looks more natural now, And I also like how you did it to make it look actually silver with the shading and stuff. But enough with that, define the earpink -- Reuploaded- I blurred the earpink, but it looks odd. Anyways, the stripes on the tail are fine as they are. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  23:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still is hard to see...define it more. 16:05, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights more consistent. The shoulder highlight looks brighter than the others. 19:22, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I can change the highlights if they look off. Mintstar  This time for Africa!  14:49, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add a stripe near/in her neck area. It looks empty to me. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:38, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:50, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a stripe on her forehead? If there is, define it ALOT, and blur the shading down the back --

Reuploaded- BlueOrca, it would help if you signed with all four ~'s so I can get around your template! :D Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:07, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more stripes to the chest area. :3 15:42, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Anything else? Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:55, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) ~ Tweaked
-- Shading needed to be blurred. Original artist is none other then Nightfall. Comments?  Law liet  Li ght 03:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC) I think it needs to be blurred a little more. (*cough*Light > L*cough* :P) Darkhallows   Enter the cave? 03:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. (In your dreams, perhaps. xD)  Law liet  Li ght 03:57, July 13, 2011 (UTC) On the tail, I can't tell if they're supposed to be stripes, but it looks like leaked lineart to me. 04:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC) It was leaked lineart. Sorry about that. =/ Fixed.  Law liet  Li ght 04:13, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Blur the haunch shading more. 16:20, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. Does it look better?  ℓαω ℓιєт  Li ght 19:44, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail shading a bit... 01:27, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> ℓαω ℓιєт  Li ght 01:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Blur the shading and earpink. Nice job, Cloudskye! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:04, July 15, 2011 (UTC) I'm not touching the earpink. It only said the shading needed to be tweaked, not the ear pink. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> ℓαω ℓιєт  Li ght 02:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> ℓαω ℓιєт  Li ght 02:42, July 15, 2011 (UTC) The lineart is blurred in a couple of places. 18:38, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 18:55, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I think the shading at the top of the neck/chest can be blurred a bit more. 16:11, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. 21:01, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading in between the haunch and the... shoulder, I think. So basically the stomach, I guess. :3 14:29, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. eh. 04:00, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hollowpaw (A) - Tweaked
Added the white belly. Original artist: Hawktalon Darkhallows   Enter the cave? 03:39, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Blur a bit more where the white meets the brown. <span style="background-color: #B7CEEC; -moz-border-radius: 10px 2px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Law liet  Li ght 03:57, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Nice! there's a strip of white right next to the arm/front leg, so make that match in color :) 04:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Great job! Blur the white part more.  16:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Woo. ;3 Smudge the white, a bit, too. Andmake the earpink smaller.  01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Looking good!  16:07, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 17:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Shading fail. Anyways, Here's Mousefang. I redid the shading, but I don't think I like the pattern. Might choose another pattern for this one. Anyways, comments? 05:18, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Oh!

And I believe the original artist was Shaf Girl :) 05:20, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

All I can say is define the shading alittle and make the earpink fill in the ear correctly--

The eye is misshapen, blur shading on the chest, thicken shading on the haunch a tad, make the earpink proper, and I'm pretty sure you're supposed to shade/highlight the tail the other way.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 06:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Plus, the erpink looks a little missapen at the bottom, and the chest shading needs to go on the chin as well. The eye color is too neon. 14:02, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur teh shading on the chest. 16:49, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could, darkened eye, fixed eye, darkened earpink, lightened shading at some parts, fixed tail shading, added chin shading, fixed anglement of the earpink...and... yeah. xD 17:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. :P 19:29, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Changes were showing, but not anymore. It stopped showing the changed before those two past comments, but it wouldn't let me edit xD 00:03, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, changes are showing again. Sorry I was at the beach all day, re-comments? 01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy. Would you like me to help as I did with Whitewing, or can you do it? <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  02:05, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her neck. Looks great otherwise~ Chell;  Aperture Science Test Subject.  19:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Mintstar: I'm sorry that you're doing all this for me ^^' You don't have to blur it though, but thanks anyways :D Getting a new computer soon, it will be great starting from scratch.. 19:09, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, just blue the earpink a tad more~ Chell;  Aperture Science Test Subject.  20:41, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :D 00:54, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink still looks kinda crooked --

Re-uploaded. 03:21, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading under the ear and the stomach shading where the haunch meets the upper body, close to the back. 03:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 21:53, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:27, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading looks a little too concentrated, if you know what I mean. Maybe it's just me ♔  S u n s p i r i t  ♔ Back in... uh, yellow? 07:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix it. Just letting everyone know that the changes are no longer showing. 16:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, and I don't think blurring it will help. Try redoing it? <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:48, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (D) ~ Redone
Original artist - Bramble; Redone - longhair. 17:11, July 18, 2011 (UTC) And, don't tell me to blur the shading, because I've blurred it as much as possible. 17:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Darken the scars' colour. 18:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I got it off of his other charart. Not changing that, or the earpink color, or the pelt color. 19:03, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I got my charart's color from his warrior, but I'm changing it. Tweak Week is supposed to make them look better, so I think you should change it. Also make the pelt color a little more blue-gray. 19:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC) It is blue-gray, but I'll make it a little bluer. 19:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC) RE-Uploaded' but changes aren't showing... 19:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC) He was also called gray, light gray, and dark gray, so I don't see why it should be so blue. 19:44, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Blur highlights. Wild   breath   21:26, July 18, 2011 (UTC) I said already; I've blurred it as much as possible. 21:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Can you try blurring just a tad more? It doesn't need to blurred a lot more, anyways. Add some shading to the front back leg. Also make the scars more noticeable. :3 15:42, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. 16:38, July 19, 2011 (UTC) In the space between the haunch and the front leg the pelt seems to be lighter than the rest of the pelt. Can you maybe add shading there or make it so it matches the rest of the pelt? 20:51, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded 23:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Grrrr...changes still won't show. 23:14, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back legs. 19:27, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Aww...if you had commented 4 hours later, it would be approved. xD Re-Uploaded. 09:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make this more blue? :3 I'm not sure if it's just me, but it's really gray. Add some shading to ze chest, otherwise, awesome. ;D 15:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail (MCA) ~ Redone
Original artist was Minnowclaw, and I redid it as a tabby. My other charart has gone through 24 hours after an upload without any comments to fix anything, so I decided to put this one up. Comments? 22:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ooohhh, pretteh! Blur the markings on the leg, just a tad though. 22:50, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks ^^ Blurred (re-uploaded) 23:02, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Does this mean his kit and apprentice art are also being redone? 03:14, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I think so. I do believe we decided to give all ginger cats stripes. 03:15, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular and move it up a little bit. Define some of the stripes. :3 15:37, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''I hate apprentices' earpink... 17:16, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing, so you'll have to look at the image on the file page. Its the one with the good earpink... 17:53, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near the shoulder and darken the earpink. :3 20:53, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:33, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpin? It's kinda hard to see. 01:29, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, most ginger cats are tabby. Not all, but most. Hmm, the stripes look a bit unnatural to me. Maybe blend them a tiny bit? 19:25, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little. Nice work! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:45, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 09:43, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still looks pale. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:08, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Foxleap (A) ~ Redone
This looks stupid. xD Changes right now aren't showing (for me, at least) Go to the edit history if you really wanna see it. xD Original artist was Dawnfeather. 04:01, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, is pretteh. The ear pink looks hard to see though.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Voldemort: Harry, kiss <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">me! 04:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Blur the stripes more to match his warrior charart. 17:22, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is nice! The pelt looks a little bit more brown than in his warrior, that could just be me though. 00:21, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if changes are showing. 15:58, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, they're not. Blur the earpink a bit more. 09:53, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (L) - Tweaked
Ugh... I've had this done for awhile, but wasn't sure about the neck. Anyways, the shading was blotchy, the eye was altered, earpink looked off, and the original artist was Shimmerpool. If it's blotchy, I can remove the highlights. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:green;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">Mintstar  This time for Africa!  15:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

She needs silver round her muzzle.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Voldemort: Harry, kiss <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">me! 15:02, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I just highlighted the muzzle. Reuploaded. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, I think it was supposed to be that way, But tweak it if you want x) smudge the earpink and add shading to the front left leg -- 17:27, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the highlights on the tip of her tail to give her a silver tail tip? She has one ;3. Also make the earpink less....flouresent. More naturual. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Her eyes need to be a lighter coulor. In the first book, it mentioned her eyes being "ice blue". 18:21, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

There's a couple of specks over her ears. Otherwise, it looks fine to me. 19:24, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- forgot the silver tail-tip, but does it look fine? <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:25, July 21, 2011 (UTC) Great job! Blur the chest shading a bit more. 09:49, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Should I just remove the highlights, so they won't interfere with the shading? <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:09, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good! I thought she had another scar on her haunch, but i dont remember. Great Job! 15:20, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can the chest shading be blurred more? 17:05, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight more. Good job! Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:11, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (K) - Redone
Original artist was Icestorm. He needed to look like his other images, so I just took the colors from his apprentice image. I changed the earpink though. Also the changes aren't showing yet. 15:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I am not sure if this is Stormkit or Crookedkit, if it is Crookedkit then make his jaw well crooked.... You want to make it unique.... The more unique the more people remember it and say "That artist is the best" !!!! Oh and make the eyes look forward not to the side. Cute but could be cuter..... 17:28, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * The jaw is the only comment that is constructive. It should be taken into consideration. 17:35, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't know if I should give him a crooked jaw or not because he was seen without one, but I guess someone will make him a charart without a crooked jaw as Sormkit once Tweak Week is over. I'll reupload this in a little bit. :) -- 19:30, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I don't know if this is how it should look... xD The changes aren't showing yet. 14:26, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe define the ear pink a little more? 17:01, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 17:49, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Did you add the crooked jaw? I don't see it. 20:17, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yep it's there.. xD 21:28, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Aw I love his crooked jaw! Maybe lighten the shading on this ---> side? Other than, it looks great! Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 11:32, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (A) - Redone
Original artist was Echoheart, and she needed to be long-haired. 15:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but you should lighten the shading a bit. 19:22, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:33, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

First of all, I am allowed to comment, aren't I? Second of all, can you lighten the shading on the front leg? The shading doesn't look right to me. 16:58, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think anyone is allowed to comment. 17:45, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W)~ Tweaked
Original artist was Icestorm. The ears needed to be torn. I wasnt sure if i shouldgive her snaggly teeth, more scars, and messy fur like Thistleclaw, what do you guys think? 19:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lineart on the torn ears thicker. Along with your suggestions, all her chararts should depict her with a broad, flattened, Persian-like face (Vicky confirmed to me that she is of Persian decent) 19:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy on the flattened muzzle, but skip out on the long teeth. If Stonetooth's art doesn't depict his long teeth, this one shouldn't either. 19:49, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:02, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:15, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pinks not my problem. 16:36, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the smudging on her pelt a tad? You don't want to lose it, but at the same time it does stand out a little. This is coming along nicely! 21:12, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- 14:07, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (K)~ Redone
It needed to be a tabby. Original artist was Echostar. 19:41, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the head and tail 19:50, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:02, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, or at least on the ear that's lighter. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:14, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the tail? I'm not sure if that would make it look better or worse... XD 17:03, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:08, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Weaselfur (W) - Tweaked
Well, original artist was Sandy, the shading needed to be blured, and because all the other ginger images needed stripes, heck, I gave him stripes too ;3. Comments? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  22:56, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes smaller, I think. Now he looks less ginger, more brown. 00:50, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the stripes a bit. They look too dark. I always thought stripes on ginger cats weren't prominent, and you can't really tell that they have them. Well, with this, you can tell. Okay, I'm done rambling. All in all, this looks really good! 11:15, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid it. Comments? Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:54, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look really, really blotchy. They don't even look like stripes. 19:10, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this looks really weird...I'm NOT trying to be mean, it just looks like the pelt is watercolored or something. You might want to redo it. The white part of the paws coming onto the arms need to be blurred into the pelt a little, and the earpink looks neon. 20:19, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's an odd line coming out of his chest and a dot behind his head, floating in space. And I agree with them, it does look a little blotchy, but I think it's cool. 21:31, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

And their's a small red dot outside the charart. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:10, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I already said that. 02:33, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller, and there's loads of blurred lineart. And yeah, I agree with Ivystripe: The pelt looks watercoloured, but it's nice that way, I think, and get rid of the extra white above the white on the foot closest to us. It's messy. And the back lineart looks a tad thick. You might want to redo this.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 02:44, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Daisyheart (D) - Redone
Not sure if changes are showing or if I got all of the blurred lineart. Original artist was Honeyrose/Bramble. xD 16:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Give her stripes. 16:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good job, I don't see any blurred lineart. 18:59, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a tad darker, I can't see it that much. *needs glasses* Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:08, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid it so I could add stripes. 22:17, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the stripes on the front paws a little. 22:19, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... just an idea, but I think the ginger patches would look more natural if blended a bit into the white. 02:34, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Stonepelt (E) - Tweaked
Original artist was Quickstep. I added a scar to his shoulder. 16:44, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

The scar looks a little thick, maybe thin it out a little. 19:00, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's suposed to be thick. It's a "large scar". 19:07, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you used the paintbrush tool for the scar: yes, for does make the scar kind of raggedy, but they are very smooth, so maybe you could try sing the calligrapy brush on a very small setting, and blur it a tad. 20:21, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the scar a little? I don't think most cats would've survived if they'd had a cut that large in the wild. The color makes it look larger than it is. 21:33, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

The scar looks too smooth and painted-on, so here's an example for scars:

Yes, I made a whole new Charart to just draw a selection of scar types because I was bored. SELECTION: Cross-Hatched(circled with green), Straight(circled with red), and Zig-Zag Spiky Thing(circled with blue). Zig Zag Spiky scar is pretty dumb, though.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 03:08, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ehh, I think it would help if you example scars were a bit thicker and flesh colored. The ones on the cat on your user page are really good! I say use that as an example over this one. 03:11, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflight said it was a "large scar", so probably something like thisOh, and the original artist was Quietstep, no Quickstep xD -- 03:24, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Of course, it would HAVE to be smaller than that...but I do think you should add ragged edges to it, but I still think the calligraphy/pen brush sounds good to do the scar. 03:28, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (A) - Re-done
Ewie. I don't particularly care for this. I was the original artist, and I re-did this as a tabby. 17:31, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:55, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes look like the leader image. 19:03, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh! I didn't realize his leader had stripes. 19:08, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) ~ Tweaked
....I just put Littlecloud up, and it was already approved. Wow. Anyways. White cats are evil. Original artist was Icestorm, and it needed shading. 17:36, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his chest and neck. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject.  17:56, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:23, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 21:13, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (K) - Redone
Original artist was Mumble785, and she needed to be redone so she would match her description. I took all of her colors from her apprentice charart. Comments? :3 18:42, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me or is this flatt? :3 I lokoed in the history, too. 20:23, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is a little redder than her other pixils, so color-pick if off. 21:15, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add some light highligts to make her look more 3-D. 21:34, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are optional, she doesn't need them. Tone down the nose pink colour a bit. 21:39, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ Tweaked
Needed shading. Orignal artist is Sandwich989. Jeez, this is an awkward color to work with. 18:45, July 22, 2011 (UTC) Add shading to the chest. 18:52, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had added shading to begin with. I think I blurred too much the first time, so that's why you didn't see it. 18:58, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add a light part to the top of his back foot, and blur the front arm shading more. 21:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I have an idea. Am I going to get yelled at if I re-do the image, but follow the exact same color scheme? The darker part of the legs was already there, and it's hard to work with... 14:09, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did it, and cut and pasted the ear pink and the eyes. 14:49, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Redtail (A)- Redone
Okay like all the rest of his images, it needed to be long haired. Original artist was NIghtshine. I'm going to be away from the 23 to the 30th of july, so unfortunatly the changes will be a long time coming. 19:30, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Give him feathered ears like his other images. 20:22, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 21:52, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. Nice job! <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:28, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- 14:08, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (E)- Tweaked
Original artist was Mossfire&Stealthwhisker, and she needed white patches. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  22:28, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Meh, the line between the white and the black on her face and chest looks unatural. Make it more curvy --

The line's just going straight across, that isn't really natural. xD 22:36, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make it blend in more; also, did you do something to the earpink? Sorry, but the earpink looks like a big blurry blob 22:44, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Ivystripe, I noticed that too. But I wasn't sure if I was supposed to fix that since I was only supposed to add white patches, and her other images have earpink like that. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  23:09, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the image name to Dappletail.elder.png Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:21, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

There needs to be a white tail-tip. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 04:50, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! I love it! There needs to be a white tip like Maplepool said. Other then that, it's awesome!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 13:56, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

=Discussion Area= Use this area to post join requests, questions, and general discussion.

New Project
Please comment on this: Forum:New Project. 01:11, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join?
I don't now how to shade on MS Paint, but I'll figure that out soon so please can you add me as a kit until I know? I'm also a total drama fan by my siginature. Go Team Noah 03:34, July 11, 2011 (UTC) A lead will add you in soon. :) I don't think you CAN shade in MS paint, but you can use Pixlr, or download Gimp (it's free and safe, don't worry). And sign with four ~'s. Just type four of them at the end of your post and it will sign for you. Very simple. ^^ ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥

And Sumopaint is good also. Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Can I join?? I dunno how shade on GIMP. -- 01:33, July 12, 2011 (UTC) Sure! Just wait for a lead to add you in :) You'll be added as a kit, not being able to post a charart until you've served for a month :) As for GIMP, I reccomend if you do not know how to use that, to use Pixlr, Sumopaint or even Photoshop :) 02:54, July 12, 2011 (UTC) I looked at Ivyheart's Charart Tutorial and I figured out how to shade and I am getting pretty good!-- 14:37, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, can I join, please?
Hi, can I join as a apprentice, please? Amberfur 21:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Sure, you can join, just wait 'till a lead will add you in. But, you will be added in as a kit, kits can't do charats, but they can comment on them :) Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 23:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC) Hi i reaallyreally want to join. CAn i? Scarface9lives howl for the moon 14:12, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Approved Charart

 * So, yes, I fail. While approving Rainwhisper's Spottedleaf's image, I accideantly forgot I copied pasted it and approved Lionblaze instead. I couldn't undo the Lionblaze edit to get back at the Spottedleaf edit, so should I just leave it like that since Spottedleaf's current image would currently replace the old one? 22:01, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ooh, that's bad. Um, maybe a lead should decide. That's all I got :P Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:58, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Cant you find all the coding in the history? 00:36, July 13, 2011 (UTC) You should be able to. Its not hard, just go to the edit and find the edit differences, and copy-paste it, and add it right back. 17:48, July 13, 2011 (UTC) I can only edit one line a time, and it's so complicating. But no, I cna't. It keeps saying, "cannot undo due to conflicting interedimate edits" 23:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hi can I join PCA?
Hi Im Sparrowpool and I was wondering if I could join PCA Thanks! Sparrowpool 14:33, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Sure, but a lead will have to add you in. You'll be added as a kit, so you can't do chararts for a month and only comment on images. 21:10, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Okay thanks! Sparrowpool 22:05, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please comment on
this forum regarding setting up rules for the new chat room. 22:22, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Question about Leafstar's images
Ok, I know I put my question in the incorrect place last night, where nobody could see it, so I'm just making a new section for it. On the Nominations page, I had originally put Leafstar's images down as needing cream (I DON'T see cream anywhere on her images), and somebody chnged it to just needing cream stripes. I'm confused as to how she has cream on her: I mostly wanted to clear that up, because I'm doing her queen image, but it'll be hard to make it match if she's not tweaked for the right thing. 16:07, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

There are cream blotches along her haunch, her back, her fore-head, her tail, her stomach, and her left fore-leg. I really like how this is, the cream is nice and soft. I never pictured her with cream blotches patched all over her, I think it was supposed to be much more subtle Night Fall 19:14, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like brownish-ginger to me. Berrynose is cream. 20:17, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well it blends into her pelt more and it looks pretty cream against the brown. It doesn't have to be like Berrynose cream, then it would look kind of odd and stand out too much in my opinion. 17:13, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like highlights to meWildfire 02:34, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Not to me. Highlights are brighter tones of the pelt, but the cream here isn't at all the shade of brown. I think Rainwhisper is right, if we did each cat with the same color of cream, then they wouldn't stand out as individuals. I think every cat that has cream on their fur has a different and unique shade of it. I think she's beautiful as she is Night Fall 02:37, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, usually when a cat is cream and tabby it means that their stomache and muzzle are totally cream, such as the white on Billystorm. I think the character art is nice, but the cream is unnatural. 19:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I agree that they look like highlights. Maybe at least add a cream underbelly, chest, or muzzle, like said above? 19:03, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I just really hoped she gets tweaked soon, because while Tweak Week is going on and I can't submit anything, I want to try to get it as ready as I possibly can, since we have a lot of chararts to do, and I need the right cream color (fyi the cream on all her images ARE in fact different, so one has to be picked for all of them) 20:25, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Forum
Please comment on this forum regarding setting up rules for the new chat room. 22:22, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Talk Page
Something seems to be wrong with the talk page. Whenever I edit something, and I think this happens to anyone who edits anything on this page, all of the comments and things get jumbled together. So.. um, does anyone know what's going on? xD 14:40, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm having the same issue. I think someone's signature got messsed up. 14:46, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

That's what I think, because not all of the talk page is like that. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:11, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Questions:
Hello! I have a couple questions. First, when is Tweak Week going to end? Second, where is the list of chararts that need tweaking or being completely redone! Please comment. Thanks.  HA WK FI RE98  17:30, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

The Tweak Week nominations are here :) 19:16, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

August 7 ;) 19:18, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

It might go longer. We have a a lot of images left to be done, and i doubt we can finish most by the 7th. 19:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I would strongly press for an extension. If we keep going at this rate, we'll never finish. 20:08, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree with Moonflight. I've already done four chararts, and I still don't think that's enough. 20:16, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay so I'm not the only person thinking it should go longer. It would help if people nominated more warriors, and possibly make it so we can reserve 3 chararts at a time? Thoughts? 01:04, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

You should only make it three for the ones that can handle it. Heck, there may be some members that can only handle one or two. Although, three does sound like a good idea. Or, we could just extend TW an extra week or two. I can do as many as needed, but only within my skill level. 01:38, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hi.Im Sol988.I would like to join to make chararts.may i please join?

!!!It's Sol988!!! 14:35, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in, Sol988. Take a look at our guidelines and some tutorials to get you started. Also about Tweak Week, I think those ideas sound good. I looked at the list and we have a long way to go. x3 14:39, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  15:10, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I agree to extending Tweak Week, but how long are we going to extend it? The list is quite long, and a week or two may not be enough for some of the images needing to tweak (i.e. shading). Many apprentices I know are eager for Tweak Week to get done so they can work on their charart. It's a bit unfair to keep them waiting especially to the ones that have just become apprentices. As for the 3 chararts I think it would be a good idea, as people would know what they're limits are. Nominating more warriors would be good, but only if you think they're ready to tweak images. 15:50, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay i added a third colum to the reservation table, and got rid of the dates, because we dont need them really. I'm noit sure how long we'd extend it, we might aswell just wait and see how many are left when the time comes. 16:48, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good idea. I'm not sure why the date thing is even up there, since I don't think people chance it every time they reserve a new charart for TW. 17:01, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, plus there are a LOT of images to do for the Warriors App, Crookedstar's Promise, and The Rescue, so it's going to have to end some time. I do agree that sounds like a good idea, allowing warriors to have more images. By the way, as long as I DON'T edit the Pending section, can I go ahead and update the charart I have reserved? Just so it's here? 20:29, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think you can... We all know who had who. That won't change when TW is over. 20:32, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'll let people know it was reuploaded. 21:17, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, how long was Tweak Week last time? Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 00:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea, but I've been thinking...I KNOW there are a lot of images that need to be done, but at least those characters have images. There are many cats, such as Firekit and Beetlenose that have absolutelly NO pixils, and they need some. I do think that if the admins want it to be significantly longer that we should still be able to resume doing normal pixils. There are more chances for Tweak Week 00:57, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

May i join you?
hello, i know i came here to ask you a request to join your project. I will except any slot you have open for me. I would really like to join to help out with the warrior community. 20:01, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I was hoping you'd come join us, RoseStar! Anyways, a lead will add you in when they see this. I recommend reading the guidelines and tutorials if you need any help, or you can ask a senior member. 20:11, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in as a kit. ;3 21:38, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Images
Why are the changes on images not showing again? Is it because they're too many pictures on this Wiki? Snowdazzle¹²³ Lets count numbers! 22:14, July 22, 2011 (UTC)