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Dapplepelt (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to remove white. Not sure if this color looks ok but I'm not removing the patches. I think the eyes are also the wrong color (they were changed after I was done with them) so I'll fix that on this and the MC in my next reupload  03:46, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more brown patches elsewhere to make these ones fit in better with the rest of the pattern?

Maybe make the patches black? If you don't want to, that's fine, though. I just think the brown color is a bit jarring. 4:13 Fri Oct 30

Reuploaded  04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the med. 09:13, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hey ivy i have mfv right here and it says dappled pelt is an orange and white tortoiseshell. 12:41, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's probably just me or my monitor but the new brown patches look kinda green?

There appears to be a bit of waste under her chin and around her tail. -- 18:02, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Snow, Dapplepelt isn't actually described as dappled anywhere? Plus, dappled is a word used in warriors on more than just torties, and a word rarely used to describe cats outside of the series at all. So basically all it has to do is fit the definition of "spots or round patches" if they're described as dappled. It doesn't have any "official" link with any color or genetics or anything.

Paleh, I think you misunderstood. She's saying Dappled Pelt is described as an orange-and-white tortie, not that she's dappled. Her name in Dawn of the Clans and Moth Flight's Vision is Dappled Pelt, not Dapplepelt.

Ohhh whoops, my bad. I thought that didn't quite make sense... but anyways, where's the cite? I don't see it on the page. I get that it's in mothflight's vision, but it's not currently on the page, so

Well, the book's not released yet, so we can't officially add it. Winter got her copy before the release date.

In that case, should we hold off her images then? I don't know when that's supposed to be released but if it's just going to be reverted, shouldn't the work not be put into it? 03:10, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Since she has a cite now for the white can we revoke the tweak nomination? 06:00, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

no because she's an orange-and-white tortoiseshell, therefore we need to get rid of the brown and reduce the amount of black, basically calling her a calico 13:13, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think we can simply undo her tweak. She already has very little black on her, I don't think it matters. 13:38 Tue Nov 3

It does matter because orange-and-white implies there's less black, and there was very little white on her to begin with 18:02, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I can add more white but this tweak is to remove the white all together, totally different thing and from what I know we're not allowed to change what we were tweaking for initially. And this is a whole different tweak and my tweak time, as well as the others are nearly up  22:35, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

She was confirmed to be an orange-and-white tortie, so that nullifies the "removing the white" tweak- you'd be allowed to do what someone else suggests. Honestly, I also think you'd be allowed an extension, given that when this was put up, we were unaware of her description in Moth Flight's Vision.

Reuploaded I looked up orange and white tortie and this is what I'm sticking with because plenty of these came up in the search results. Imitating smudging without a smudging tool is difficult  07:29, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (MC)- Tweaked
^Same as above  03:47, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the paws 09:12, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be gold. 11:38, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  07:29, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (Ancient) ~ Withdrawn
12:14, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Is that white pixel at the very top of the eye supposed to be eye shine/highlights, or did it just get missed when coloring?

i didnt touch the eye it was already there. 17:41, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

idk whats going on with these images so im withdrawing. 07:13, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (Ancient) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to darken. It also killed the shading >_> 09:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the highlights and shading 10:59, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 21:54, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt. Queen) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked because the highlights were apparently throwing the color off. 09:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste 10:58, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

And she still looks too light 12:26, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Where is the waste? And also, unless my computer is screwing with colors or I need glasses, it's not too light. Which image are you comparing it to? 13:42, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

The waste is to --> side of the tail, near the top. Also, I think the image could be darkened just a tad more, as it is a bit lighter than the images you showed. 22:12, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

its still lighter than the apprentice and such. 14:49, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 04:30, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Fernshade (W) ~ Tweaked
when yuo try your best but you don't succ

oa was scar, redone by night shine. tweaked to remove white 11:58 Wed Nov 4

could you define the shading? 08:38, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (W) ~ Redone
OA is Shadowedheart or Sandstar12, redone artists are Mistystar139 and Scarletwind and tweaker is Blueorca. Redone to remove white. I copied the pattern so badly >< 00:52, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail and neck shading. 02:12, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

reupload 07:40, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Spiderleg (W) ~ Tweaked
OAs were Sandstar12 and SnowedLightning, and tweaked once by Bramble. Tweaked to restrict brown to underbelly only. -- 01:35, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt. Q) - For Approval
más bueno. 07:19, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Is this image in use? It's not on her article. 21:49, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

... It should be. It's for a silver alt. I added it in. 03:16, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Spiderleg (K) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Darkhallows and SnowedLightning. Tweaked to restrict brown to underbelly only. -- 15:08, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Thorn ~ Tweaked
oa = skye 04:44, November 7, 2015 (UTC)