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Whiskernose (E) - For Approval
changes So I'm quite proud of this. 16:32 Sun Oct 5

The shading looks like it's leaking away from the lineart in a few areas, like on the chest and the front leg closest to us. I also think the shading on those parts could be lighten for it looks a little blotchy than the rest of the shading. I like this .o. 12:36, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me, and it doesn't seem blotchy at all. Could you smudge and/or blur the ear pink a bit?

Oh no I just saved the file =/ anyway, Reups! changes are here 16:58 Mon Oct 6

Define the shading/light on the tail and legs? 22:06, 10/6/2014

Still working?

Reups. meh I've been busy with school.... anyway I defined the overall shading to go with the back shading. 13:02 Sun Oct 12

Some of the shading is fading towards the lineart. 14:44 Sun Oct 12

Slightly define the neck shading more and even out the tail shading. 01:43, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading around the back of the haunch/rump, and add some depth to it. 11:17, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 15:48 Mon Oct 13

Thin out the shading on the tail, and probably add some light near the base of the tail behind the haunch. 15:50 Mon Oct 13

I think I did this right? Reups 16:08 Mon Oct 13

Define the light on the tail? 00:42, 10/14/2014

Reups 14:52 Tue Oct 14

Heronwing (Alt.Warrior) - For Approval
So much stripe :o 19:02, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and define the shading a tad. Lovely job as always, Sziri. 19:59, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes don't look blurred on his apprentice, and I think the shading could be blurred a bit, instead of defined. This should also be named File:Heronwing.warrior.alt.png. Would you like me to rename it for you?

Re-ups Yes,please:). Thanks Bluestar:3 19:18, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. There you go. =)

Thank you:) 05:04, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink just a tad more. This is pretty! =) 00:07, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

You did a great job! However, the pattern on the belly and to a lesser extent, the neck and face, get lost in the shading. Could you lighten the shading there a bit, so we can see the pattern through it? 06:41, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks:) 18:31, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us. 11:41, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 12:33, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the light on the tail? Lovely charart, 13:21, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups:) 14:26, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the stripes a smidge. 13:06 Sun Oct 12

The stripes aren't smudged on the other images, so I think they're okay as they are. --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 15:20, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on all the legs - I like this tabby pattern! 17:57, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:18, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

I gotta agree with Amber's earlier comment about the stripes. Smudge them just a tad bit. This is pretty, Sziri. =) 03:09, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:08, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Not that I am in the PCA, but I think you should blend the shading with the stripes so it clashes nicely. Just saying.-- 21:22, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? The shading is fine (in regards to Spottedgorse's comment) 00:46, 10/14/2014

Re-ups 18:07, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. Warrior) ~ For Approval
First time I've truely loved how my texture came out (thank you for the tutorial, Ferk). Comments? 21:07, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

His eyes should be amber, like his other images. Also blur/smudge the shading (whatever your preference is) so it's a bit smoother. Could you also smudge or smooth out the texture a bit more too? All in all (I'm being nitpicky), this is really good. .o.

Reuploaded. I didn't realize the eyes had to match even if it's an alt. And thanks. 21:26, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Hey no problem! I'm sorry I never got around to that other one.... Oops. Anyway, friend, the texture on the tail should curve with the tail. It looks like it's all going one way. I wanna know how everyone gets their texture to look feathery like this. Please tell me how. Mine looks blocky and lame. 22:04, 10/6/2014

It looks like you've got a blank spot of shading on the back. Did you mean to do that? Ferk, try blurring your texture. That's how I get mine to look somewhat normal. 10:14 PM, Mon Oct 6, 2014

Reuploaded. Basicly, I put the texture layer on multiply and added the texture. Then, I blur it (using blur tool), and used the smudge tool at a size of 05 (Gimp). I set the layer opacity and then duplicated it (mostly to give it definition). And yes, I meant to do that. 22:22, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reuploaded. 23:39, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and feet, and blur (and possibly expand) the tail shading, mainly around the base of the tail. 06:39, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:48, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

No comments in a while, and I like this, so CBA? 14:44 Sun Oct 12

Sorry, but the shading on the side by the haunch is blotchy with a light patch surrounded by shadows. Also, you might want to curve the shading edges a bit more and blur it. And slightly nit-picking, but the shading is receding from the lineart on the back of the cat. 01:47, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. I've used this style of shading before (see Mistystar's Alt Warrior image), and no one commented on it before. As for the receding shading, it's actually the texture, and I can't really fix it. However, I'll change it if someone else agrees. 19:59, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Atelda. <span style="">00:47, 10/14/2014

Reuploaded. 00:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Remove the patch of light on the flank by filling it in with shading. <span style="">1:22 Tue Oct 14

Reuploaded. 20:07, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (Star) - For Approval
this pattern was too hard to match Brick  05:55, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws. Well done! 08:44, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, thanks! Brick 21:10, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

You need to make him paler to match the tweaked warrior (kit and apprentice shall be tweaked shortly); I just ran the dodge tool over it. 21:46, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, used the dodge tool and lightened the opacity of the flecks a bit. Brick 22:20, October 7, 2014 (UTC)

He needs to be paler I believe. And also it may be just me but the image looks tinted green. I also see stray solid pixels on the tail. 12:00, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, the image shouldn't be appearing greenish, and it doesn't look green on my screen. Might just be your monitor. Brick 15:32, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Changes, http://i58.tinypic.com/vsdf9x.png Brick  18:23, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

I'm not seeing any greenish tint on my screen. <span style="">7:58 PM, Sat Oct 11, 2014

The direction of light is confusing, particularly with the tail shading and a little bit with the chest. You also might want to consider darkening the shading for the chest/paws/face region. 01:52, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Don't darken it; define it. I know it's there, because of everything around it, but I can't see it well compared to some spots. <span style="">00:49, 10/14/2014

Re-ups, tried my best to define it. As for the spot of light on the chest, it should be alright, as I've seen other images use this light source before. And sorry for the late re-upload, I've had a geography test to revise on. Brick  The Bite of '87  18:53, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Tornear (star) ~ For Approval
Yep, this is very soon after my last one, is that even allowed...

Well, I tried, the stripes are really hard to match because the artist is obviously better than me, and trying to transfer the design onto a starclan image is annoying. I've only just noticed but why is Tornear called Tornear if he hasn't been described with a torn ear? 20:04, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

The shading seems quite flat. Darkening it or adding another layer of shading would be the fix. This is pretty! <span style="">21:36 Fri Oct 10

Re-uploaded Thank you, Hawky, I've duplicated both shading levels, so that it should be a lot more defined. -- 22:45, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the ear pink on his left ear? Brick  The Bite of '87  10:40, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Defined ear pink for both of his ears, which may of caused some of the shading to appear more pale. -- 22:45, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Might just be my screen but his stripes are looking a little green. --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 14:34, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think they look green, Eos. 17:44, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

I know it is my character art, but I don't think they look green, although if other people touch up on that I'll change it. 19:15, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

They actually do look a bit green to me. Maybe it's a highlight or something like that and it decided not to function properly.

Re-uploaded I've darkened the stripes and removed the highlight completely, but I can still see green, does anyone have any suggestions on how to fix that? 22:24, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps give the stripes a black or dark gray tint and that'll probably do the trick. 14:33, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Thanks for that Tiger, but I've tweaked the texture, and I've multiplied the layer the stripes were on so they appear better, I hope.... --  17:45, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Are is eyes blue? If so make them crystallized. 21:29, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Eyes are perfectly fine. However, blur/smudge the shading on the back/haunch/whatever part of that body that is. Looks a bit too sharp. <span style="">00:51, 10/14/2014

He looks really blue.. perhaps try making his stripes more black?-- 01:22, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think it was the tinted shading making him appear blue, so I've edited the shading, hopefully that's done the job. I've also played around with his stripes a little, making them lighter, to appear even less green. x3 -- 17:52, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (star) - For Approval
I hate this pattern... And I'd like somebody to tell me how to deal with this alignment thing, 'cause I don't know how EosOfTheDawn (talk) 15:53, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading. This is very good Eos =)  16:34, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

For the alignment all you do is  <span style="">4:59 PM, Sat Oct 11, 2014

Re-up Thanks both of you! Just looked through some of my first chararts. Argh. --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 19:31, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think there would be any shading in the (our right) ear, because of the light source you're using. Great job on those stripes! 17:42, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Please blur stripes. Other than that, beautiful job! 21:34, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I might not explain this correctly...  Just a bit of nitpicking but, the white in the pupil in the dark side is brighter than the one on light side... perhaps change them to have the same shade of white. 00:02, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Eyes are fine. Guys, honestly, this nit-picking on the smallest stuff like the white in the eye has got to stop. Anyway, please blur/smudge the chest shading a bit. <span style="">00:54, 10/14/2014

can you define the facial and leg shading just a smidge? 01:25, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Lo) ~ For Approval
this is so bad it's giving me nightmares. 16:07, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

She's more silver on her other images. Lighten her a bit; and define the shading on the four legs. 16:26, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 16:53, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the face and feet shading? 11:25, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes be here, and I did some stuff with the shading and stripes 15:31, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the far back foor? That is literally the only thing I see, this is gorgeous. 15:32, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes really? Thank you! 15:37, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Grasspelt (Star) - For Approval
-sobs- More dying kittehs! 01:21, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define it on the paws. 06:57, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re Uploaded 14:22, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink, define the lightsource as the tail tells me it's coming from one direction and the rest of the body tells me another direction. And the body shading is leaking away from the lineart and where the tail is on the body. And wouldn't this have to be under the old post or at least the old post archived before this being reposted? Not sure, maybe someone can give second opinion? 14:31, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think Tiger's fine with it being here- she was told in chat to just make a new section and the old post would be archived. I also think that smudging the earpink is optional? But I reccomend it, especially on these blanks.

Define the earpink and the face shading. 15:04, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly brighten the earpink? It looks as though it blends completely and that there is no earpink at all. 21:36, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re Uploaded People on the chat said the lightsource and "leaking" line art was fine so I didn't change it. 23:07, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re re uploaded. I brightened up the earpink. 23:33, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

It would be shaded fully behind the tail. The shading shapes around it at the moment. At least shade that over. 00:49, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail? <span style="">00:56, 10/14/2014

Add and define the shading along the edges.-- 01:24, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading, too. 09:33, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

The ears are beautiful. Good job Tigerbird with brightening them up. I don't know if you could make it any better. 11:15, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smear the fur into the earpink a bit more. I also think there is receding shading on the side, around the tail tip. 16:02, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reupped I think smearing fur is optional but I did everything ya'll suggested. 00:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (Ki) ~ For Approval
Breeze withdrew Tangle so... hehe. I was working on Tangle during my vacation cause I was bored ._. anywho, :3  02:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the shading and lighten it some. 07:03, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Also, would you like the file for the apprentice, so you can get the colors right? 08:09, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:50, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste everywhere, and IDK if its just me or the waste, but the lineart seems blurred? 13:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Waste will be the death of me xD 14:00, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Work on the texture a bit. <span style="">3:16 PM, Tue Oct 14, 2014

The file should be named Tangleburr.kit, not Tangleburr (KI). Brick  The Bite of '87  15:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed nameing and tried to texture it. 15:51, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail - she's so cute! 16:01, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you :3 16:11, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

This looks good. :) Just shift that chin shading down slightly so it's below the chin. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 16:32, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 16:39, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Ah hold up I had to fix some waste I didn't see Reups 16:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Tangleburr.kit. As for the image, try blurring the shading on the front paws a bit? Brick  The Bite of '87  18:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Renamed it correct finally sorry about that ugh I feel so n00bish... 19:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste around the feet. Also, I feel bad for pestering you so much about this, but I think it should be in lowercase, so .kit instead of .Kit   but i'm not sure because i'm not sure if the wikia is caps-sensitive or not so it might not matter. Brick  The Bite of '87  20:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't feel bad. I'd rater do it the right way than the wrong. 20:52, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Frost (Star) ~ For Approval
First charart as a warrior. c: Yeah I said I'd go with a longfur, but I had to take my brother Frost when I saw he became available. :3 I'm actually quite proud of this..I won't darken the shading any more than this, as I don't want the white to look gray. Comments? 20:44, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Make the texture flow with the body/fur. <span style="">21:40 Tue Oct 14

It actually already is. I've made it flow exactly how it would on a short-haired cat. I could define some of the texture so it's more obvious where it's going..any other thoughts on making it look more obvious? That's the best I can think of at the moment. 22:01, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, I think it's going in the wrong direction. Instead of going in an upward/downward direction on the main part of the body, it should be going left/right, right/left (however you wish to say it), I believe. I've never seen texture go in that direction and I don't think it flows like that on a cat, so I'm pretty sure you'll need to change that...

Gotta agree with Skye here. 22:09, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, my friend she has a short-haired cat and its fur goes in an upward/downward way, so I just did it after him. But upon your guys' request, I switched the direction. 22:27, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail. <span style="">22:34, 10/14/2014

The file name is wrong. It needs to be File:Frost.star.png. Reupload over the file that's already on the wiki.

Re-uploaded. Oh sorry, the other one had been titled like that so I assumed. Changed it.

Fixed plenty of errors. I want to get this approved really fast so I can work on one of the new cats, so I went through and fixed every error I saw. 01:35, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Rainswept Flower (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Woot~ <span style="">0:11 Wed Oct 15

Stone Song (Ancient Tribe) ~ For Approval
Meh, comments? 00:11, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I updated the blanks after you made this, so add whiskers (same for turtle tail below). Aaand define the head shading? 00:17, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

This looks awesome. :) The pupil looks a bit oddly shaped though - maybe round it a bit? And also, have a bit of light on the hind leg and the front right leg. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:29, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 00:36, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Ancient) - For Approval
All colors are from her other images, so I will not change them.

That tail is amazing. I hate to ask you to do this, but define the shading? I know it's there, I just can't see it. <span style="">0:18 Wed Oct 15

Re-uploaded. Defining it on this pattern is impossible, and I don't think I can define it anymore. Also that tail took me a damn hour to even try and get right.

Hollow Tree (Ancient) - For Approval
Not totally sure of the shading, but I'm really happy with the colors and the stripes. I tried something new with the stripes, and I tried to make the colors match what some brown tabbies look like. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:28, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. 00:37, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:43, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupped again, added saturation and lightened the eyes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:50, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Dewy Leaf (Ancient) ~ For Approval
weh?? 00:49, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading just a bit. Okay how did you make this.

Half Moon (Ancient) - For Approval
meh. <span style="">00:52, 10/15/2014

Graywing (WC) (Ancient) ~ Declined
These templates are so beautiful! --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:56, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve this on the table before posting, as clearly stated in the guidelines. Sorry, but I have to decline this.

I did it right away after? Should I reserve it then try again? --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:10, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

No, you have to list it on the chart on the front page. It's our reservation table, so we know who has what images. You also need the date too.