Warriors Wiki talk:World

AaU Revival?
I am attempting the revival of the Adopt a User project; however, my idea has quite a few flaws, and I hope to somehow resolve them with the help of this Wiki. Please comment on this forum. 09:20, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Medicine ~ Silver Nomination
Well, I dont know if any of you guys heard, but Wildheart decided to leave the Wiki; I know, sad. So she asked me to nominate this page that we've both worked hard on; And I agree, I think its pretty worthy. So, Don't be shy, Tell Me what you think! -- 05:09, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm It looks GREAT, but I think it could use a few more refrences. I'll try and add as many as I can. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:59, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

It does look great, but, BlueOrca, you're not a member on this project, but if you want, I'll add you in :D And, its currently the Content Drive, so I'm not sure if you can nominate it until the next one is chosen. And, yes, it could use some more references, but it looks awesome so far! 22:29, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, Why not; Sure I'll join!

And, I dont really what you mean by "Content Drive" Mistystar, So Mind explaining to me? BUT you can just say that Wildheart nominated this instead of me, since shes the one who asked to me to so in the first place. -- 01:13, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

"Content Drive" is like a goal for the whole project. We want to get it looking great, and being informative. I asked Nightshine if we could change the Content Drive to Battles, though battles doesn't seem like it needs help anymore, right? XD. At el  da  04:24, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, lets wait for Nightshine's decision. 22:11, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, I guess its my decision now. Why don't we have Tunnelers as our next content drive? Its needs a lot of work. 17:00, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I fixed it up alittle.

Why don't you take a look at it and tell me whatya think about it. --

It still needs some work, but Medicine looks good. Could you add a few more references to Medicine, though? 18:29, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

There are tons of plants that still need sources. Also, at the bottom, you need a source for Yellowfang's quote about Foxglove and such. 22:37, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you need a lot more citations. There's lots of Source? references that need to be fixed. 18:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 19:24, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hm? Oh, sorry it's just that I'm going over my books to add the cites. Still I don't think I can do much, since Ive only read 6 books so far :\ --

I'll help. ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 04:16, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

So will I. 22:54, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I fixed about 5 source references, and I'm trying to do more. 16:34, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Woah! Thanks for all your help guyz 8D --

Ok, I fixed about 8 more references. This is taking a while! XD 18:03, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix some too. :D 16:58, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

The ones that still need citations are beech, coltsfoot, comfrey, daisy, dandelion, feverfew, honey, lamb's ear, mallow, parsley, ragwort, ragweed, raspberry, rush, snakeroot, tansy, tormentil, water mint, willow bark, wintergreen, and foxglove seeds. So if anyone comes across these while reading, it would be great to add it in! 21:23, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Deputy Ceremony ~ Silver Nomination
I added as much information as I could, and added refrences. Comments? 21:36, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps add examples in the exceptations section. Looks great! At el  da  18:14, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Could you also add a section for the origin of the ceremony? (From CoTC, when it tells the story about why deputies must be appointed by Moonhigh) Also, if possible, add more citations for the description. 22:21, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 16:38, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add a citation for the Process section. And like Mistystar said, are you working on this? 18:37, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, stupid me lost the charger to my kindle so I wasn't able to reread the section in Code of the Clans. But anyway, I've found it now XD and I added the origin section and added a reference for the process section. 19:59, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Could you add some citations to the origin section? Other than that, its great! 20:06, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Like Mistystar said, add refrences to the origin section, but I see nothing else wrong with it! 21:09, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added some refs. I didn't want to add too many as it looked really cluttered with them. 06:41, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I would have liked some more references, but if that's the way you like it, I think it's fine! 15:54, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I guess so. :P CBV? 16:53, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:32, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Warrior Ceremony ~ Silver Nomination
The page looks great! Anyways, comments? 07:39, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fantastic! Could you add some more refrences to the 'Process' Section? 20:37, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed :) And add more citations for the Virtues section, preferably one citation for each example. Great work! 16:13, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Got it! I'll fix it ASAP. 16:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Um, what sentences should I refrence? I know I sound dumb, but I really don't know. 11:17, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

The citations in the virtues section, for each example. xD ITs okay, everyone makes mistakes. 16:57, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I finished adding refrences for the virtues section. Anything else? 10:04, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Process could use some more references, though. 01:55, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Roger that! I shall fix it soon. 10:39, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, more citations in that section. But it looks great!! =) 18:38, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can somebody help me? I just moved to Taiwan, and I don't have all the books with me right now. The only books I have are the OotS series. It really sucks. 13:23, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! I'll help! 21:29, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added more citations. Is it good, Rainey? 21:37, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah! It's more than good. It's awesome! Anything else? 00:16, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, looks good! 17:50, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's ready! 23:13, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

OF course! CBV? 16:40, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:35, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Camp ~ Gold Nomination
I think it's ready! Is there anything I should add? 23:10, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps add a few more citations on the sections above known camps. Looks great though!  ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 02:50, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, a few more citations overall, and it will be perfect! 19:12, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great! I'll work on adding more in. 19:19, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added some. Is there any particular place that could use more citations? And in what book could I find info on Skyclan's camp? Thanks! 02:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar's Quest or SkyClan's destiny. The rest looks great! 01:54, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added references for SkyClan's camp. 18:56, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add citations to the Locations section and Structures? 19:43, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try. 21:10, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

There! I added more references. 21:50, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe the top paragraph should be cited, but other than that, its ready! 22:17, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll cite the top paragraph. 22:18, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I did it. ANything else? 22:23, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think its good. :D 16:52, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Will this be CBVed soon or is there anything I should add? 16:35, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, it will be CBVed after some votes are over. :P 17:34, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not trying to sound impatient, but there are only 2 votes on right now. 02:34, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

3 now. Well, onee will be over tomorrow. CBV? 17:36, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

4 now. Vote is up! Next time, don't be impatient. I might not be in a good mood XD 00:50, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

July '11 Feature Article
Its kind of early, but we should start planning our next feature article. Any suggestions? 19:27, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Warrior looks good! I think it's ready. 19:31, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think Warrior is ready to, I just read through all of it and I don't think I could fix it anymore:). Spottedstar42 The WWi ki van dals Mu st fall!!!  16:18, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I added some more citations, and it looks good enough to be featured. Any other opinions? 16:32, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Warrior looks good, I think it needs some refrences in the 'description' section, though. 21:02, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I added a few more. :) If there aren't any contradicting opinions, I'll put up the vote soon. 21:17, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! 22:31, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Warrior looks like a good choice. =D 10:22, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Are we going to vote on it soon? 15:56, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! I made it a Gold qualified FA nomination, because the article looks ready. Go vote! 19:25, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Content Drive
Medicine, our current content drive, has been nominated for silver, so we should begin discussing our next one. Anyone, opinions? I suggest Tunnelers or Battles, but I'm open to other suggestions. 18:07, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

We should do battles because it's a stub and there's a lot of info about those in the books. 18:09, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Any other comments? 15:56, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I also agree it should be Battles. There's a lot of refrences to be added plus information, as Squirrelflame said. 10:22, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, whereas for Tunnelers, there's not that many references in the books and more people could participate in Battles. 21:44, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm...maybe battles but it's been expanded a profuse number of times and it wouldn't take all that much to make it a bronze. But it could use some citations and some of the information could be expanded/ added. However, tunnelers would be a great challenge to overcome because it's not known very well. At first I thought that it was a useless page but with more info, it could be of great use. Both articles would be good for a content drive but I think battles would be quite a short content drive. I'd be in favor of tunnelers, but battles would work also.  ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:12, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, but since Battles would be a short content drive, shouldn't we get that over with first? Then, since it's said to be short, we could start on Tunnelers in a few weeks. 23:11, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Good idea! As soon as Medicine is graded silver, we can do Battles. 17:51, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's going to take a while, though. It needs a LOT more references. 21:25, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

It does. But then, a lot of articles need references. :P 18:43, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Diseases and Injuries ~ Gold Nomination
I added some citations, comments? 18:40, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

More citations in the bullets of the poisoning part. Maybe one more citation in the first paragraph of wounds, one in sprains, and a few in broken bones. Other than that, looks great! I can add a few citations too! :) 19:05, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll work on that... 19:48, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Added some. Comments? 20:41, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a citation on Sprains? 21:51, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

If not, it's fine. 22:04, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Found and added. Well, you added it, but I found it... Anything else? 22:13, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so! It looks great! 22:25, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wait! Add a reference for a broken backbone. Wildfur had a broken backbone in Fading Echoes or something. Add that citation in. 19:45, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Done! =) 19:49, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

A citation for Other Diseases? That's it, though. I think it's great! 21:46, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think for examples of wounds, you could add Antpelt's wound that later caused him to die? I'll try to see if I can get the citation for you. 23:22, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I added another citation. Comments? 00:55, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, looks good!  ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 04:22, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 23:14, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? :P 00:31, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cat Names ~ Gold Nomination
I think it's ready! I'm going to add a lot of citations though. 22:41, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add more citations, and it will be ready! :3 22:47, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Citations added! Better now? 22:04, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

The beginning of the article is really short. Is there any way you could introduce the names better? ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 04:24, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added an opening paragraph. Anything else? 23:24, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! I see nothing wrong with this. 00:00, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Do I need to add in any more references? 16:42, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add some refrences to the Reserved words section and the Ancient names section? 07:00, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

References added! Anything else? 16:12, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add any more references to the Tribe Names section or the Ancient Names section? 18:11, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I tried. If some one with Sign of the Moon could help me it would be great! I wanted to put a reference to the page where Crag becomes the new Stoneteller. And I already have one reference for the Ancients. 21:32, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I found it for you. Its on page 295. I'll add it in. 17:38, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I put the page number in. Anything else? 23:37, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Kit ~ Gold Nomination
So, I'm adding citations right now. Comments? 22:53, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add more citations to the last paragraph of description. 15:58, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay...Added. Anything else? 17:09, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Another citation for the last sentence in Education? Looks good! 19:35, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Added. :D Comments? 19:45, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so! Great job! 02:29, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add a ref for the very first sentence? other than that it looks great! 06:10, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nice eye, Specklestream! Yeah, that sentence could use a citation. 22:05, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Added. Comments? 18:13, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe another citation in education referring to a name-changing ceremony. 21:34, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, added. Anything else? 16:00, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. Looks great! 23:38, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Two questions
What are we going to do with the Rogues and Loners? There have been questions about combining them, and to express my personal opinion, I think we should leave it as two seperate articles. The second question I have is about the project deputy. Are we going to have a deputy for the project? 02:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think Rouges and Loners should be left as two separate articles, too. Of course, that's not for me to decide, but I'm just saying my opinion too! XD And for the deputy, I think Mistystar should take her time choosing the deputy. After all, it must be a hard decision! 16:47, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

So, I think they should be separate; In Clan terms they aren't the same, and each article seems long enough by itself. And, I don't know about the deputy; Different leaders have done different things; Helix didn't have a deputy, and Nightshine didn't have one for a long time, and they managed pretty well. Once I'm busier, though, and a deputy is necessary, we will. :D 15:38, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I was just curious. 18:31, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

No problem! =) 18:33, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Question
Do I have to wait for my article to be done voted on to nominate a new article or can I just nominate one right now? 16:48, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, it will be done tomorrow, anyway. :P 18:16, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mentor ~ Silver Nomination
I'm adding in a LOT of references right now, but other than that, I think it's ready for silver! 21:38, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

There! References added. Comments? 23:36, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Add the mentors listed for A Heart of a Warrior section''. 10:13, June 21, 2011 (UTC)''

Wow, I can't believe I forgot to do that. I'll do it right now! 16:15, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more citations to the Process section? It has a few, but could use a few more. 18:46, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

I added in the mentors. And btw, every sentence except for one has a reference in the Process, so I don't think I can add anymore! :P 02:44, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lol! It looks awesome Squirrelflame! 10:29, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or are there no references starting from the Dawn section? 12:42, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

No, its not just you :P Add in the references, and otherwise, it looks great! 17:14, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added in the references. Took a while, though. :P Anything else? 15:07, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Leadership Ceremony ~ Silver Nomination
It looks good to me, but I think it needs a bit more information. Any suggestions, or does it looks good the way it is? 13:35, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

All I see that needs to be done is see if you can find the specific Erin Hunter chat that corresponds to Reference 6. 14:16, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also find a few references for the last three paragraphs of Process? 17:06, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Got it! 10:21, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe one ref for the first paragraph of Process and one ref for the second to last paragraph of Process? 15:09, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Medicine Cat Ceremony ~ Silver Nomination
Since everyone seems to be nominating the ceremonies, I did this one. :P I expanded it a bit, and added lots of citations. Comments? 18:04, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add citations for the words medicine cat use to give their apprentice their full name? If not, it looks great! 10:32, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, same. One reference for the actual words of the ceremony. But other than that, looks great! 15:10, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but the words are from the same reference as the sentence after that, so I don't think I should. 00:34, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wolf - Silver Nomination
I edited the article significantly to fit the guidelines. I added a description section, and expanded everything. I added several citations from external sources. 16:49, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add a refernece for the intro and a few more for Relations to Cats? 22:51, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add a few more references. Great work! 00:32, June 24, 2011 (UTC)