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Bouncefire (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed to have stripes. OA was Sandstar12. 02:44 Wed Nov 9

Darken the shading & brighten the highlights(if you use them) - 03:02, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't use highlights, but darkened shading. 22:47 Wed Nov 9

Darken the shading just a tad more? -- 23:38, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable. 02:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Wild? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, yes, I'm still working on this, but I'm on Vancouver Island and can't access my files. I'll probably be able to reupload this on Monday. 22:41 Sun Nov 13

Reuploaded 23:50 Mon Nov 14

Rosepetal (W) - Redone
Redone to be dark cream without stripes. 00:41, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Flamingomom, and the color is from Daisy. 00:42, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, it's very blotchy. 146.115.179.113 00:48, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the earpink. 00:49, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes might not be showing. 00:51, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Another stole my reservation. >.> I am sorry but I reserved this first, and I even checked the revision history. It is not fair to me. 01:05, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. Would you mind if I did this, or would you rather do it yourself? I know what it feels like when someone steals my reservation, but I also know what it feels like to do a charart that takes a long time, put a lot of effort into it, and have to decline it, but it is yours, so if you want, I'll remove it. 01:09, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, I can't make you remove it, it would make me guilty, umm, keep doing it, it looks great! ^^ 01:12, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :3 You can do her kit version if you want, I won't reserve it. 01:14, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely, thicken and darken the shading. 18:41, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a little green on my computer... maybe make her a tad more cream? 03:08, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not changing the color; its from Daisy. Re-Uploaded. 22:49, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

She looks kinda green on mine, too. She needs to be more cream. 00:29 Tue Nov 15

Dull the earpink also, it looks too neon. 20:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is the color from Daisy, and so is the pelt color. If I change it, it'll be inconsistent with her kit image, which is already approved. Re-Uploaded. 23:51, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:54, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Flowerstar (W)- tweaked
I forgot I had to do this one too. So anywhoo I did the same thing as her leader image, burned in stripes. Commentss? - 19:00, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the 'M' on her forehead. 19:35, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I just realized, I posted this up on 11-11-11 at 11:00AM. Holy craap 8D - 19:49, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I know you weren't called to do this, but can you blur the shading? It's very hard edged. 20:53, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the chest. 00:12, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Sorry, I tried liek 5 times to fix the shading but I cant do anything about it - 01:57, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feet shading still needs to be darkened. 00:26 Tue Nov 15

Oh, and she needs a torn ear as well. 00:34 Tue Nov 15

One thing, with highlights I just really can't use them without having bad shading. I will try to blur the shading, but I hope everyone can understand that highlights are bad for the chararts I make. 03:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I guess it's better now...

Make the ear nick a little thicker. 05:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Timberfur (D) - Redone
I'm surprised no-one re-did him yet. Original artist was Mousetalon, and he needed to be longhaired. 18:34, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make him greying? It says in his page that he is. 18:47, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't sure if his whole body was greying, so I just added a greying muzzle. 18:54, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'd maybe define the muzzle more and maybe make it lighter. 00:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:19, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pupil? 02:43, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

There's a pupil >_>. There was a discussion about it, and it was agreed this eye style was okay. 02:52, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the earpink. 00:23 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded 01:24, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Archeye (W) - Tweaked
I dont know if its redone or tweaked, I redoned stripes and shadings.. OA was Insaneular.. Leaf-storm,14:11,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Ups, changes arent showing Leaf-storm,14:13,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Why is the lineart in between his haunch and his tail gone? 16:08, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That's the old version. 16:21, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

i dont like when changes arent showing Leaf-storm,16:48,November 13,2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list, but could you make the ear-pink less purple. 22:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was on the list Leaf-storm,12:57,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Reupladed, late, sorry I wasn't on my computer before Leaf-storm,13:38,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and shading. 00:21 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded, 15:15,November 15,2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) - Tweaked
Blurred shadings and added some more, OA is Bramble Leaf-storm,14:53,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the shading on her paws. 16:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:30,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the neck shading and lighten the shading on the middle of the haunch. Blur all shading. 22:59 Sun Nov 13

Next comment will be blur the shadings more yes? I do it..but I dont have much time now Leaf-storm,13:46,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload the image? Also, try to match the shading to this tutorial about shading 'cause right now the shading doesn't make much sense. 00:18 Tue Nov 15

I make it tomorrow because on this computer I have hight brightness and I cant see the shadings correctly. 19:58,November 15,2011 (UTC)

Poolcloud (Q) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow, and the shading and markings needed to be redone. 18:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink and blur the patches a lot. 19:44, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink and patches look fine to me, darken the shading a little bit - 19:47, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the patches look a tad prickly. Blur it a little bit. The whole ear looks pink, define the edges of it. Looking good =) 21:31, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thats how she does the earpink XD - 21:41, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno the earpink looks... off. I don't think it should fill the whole ear. 23:00 Sun Nov 13

The earpink filling the whole ear is epic. Blur the shading on the tail. -- 01:25, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yep, that's how I do the earpink and I'm not changing it. I did it for Wind and it turned out fine. 00:52, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Smudge it into the ear some more, then. 01:37 Tue Nov 15

Re-uploaded. 01:39, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
Added longer tail. Original artist was Sandy, redone by Scarlet. Comments? Elorisa  18:24, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks a little odd... When I added it to the list, I pictured it being expanded at the middle, so that it was roughly the same shape, but longer. Make sense? 18:28, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded; Better? ''' Elorisa   18:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, perfect :) 18:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip of the tail a bit pointier and erase the waste around the tail. <span style="">22:45 Sun Nov 13

Leafpool (Ki)- Redone
She needed to match the other images... OA was Darkhallows. Constructiments? 19:32, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her paws a bit. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 00:36, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:24, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes just a bit. Me lufs this. 05:13, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) ~ Redone
Needed long hair and OA was Icethroat21. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:00, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

You need to upload it over Dawnflower's elder image, I believe. :3 22:23, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Debating whether I should do that or not when I was uploading it... I'll switch it right now. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   23:38, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and lighten the haunch shading. 01:09, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

And redden the earpink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink">Spring...✿ 01:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading and fixed the haunch shading and reddened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   02:01, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pink looks hot pink-ish. 17:25, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:05, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller. 00:13, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Rock (Ro) - Redone
I guess I changed my mind. Original artist was Moonflight, and it needed to be more brown. 01:08, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and theres some waste between his back legs. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:22, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wait for changes... 21:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 23:00, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:07, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Is the tip of the tail meant to have a point like that? I don't remember one being on there on the CG, but maybe I'm just forgetting. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:30, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the tail is meant to be like that. 01:52, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The mud is difficult to discern from the pelt. Can you add a defining feature to it, such as modify the color and/or add mottles to it? 22:25, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Raggedstar (W) ~ Redone
Okay, OA is Hollytail, with a tweak by Scarlet. You have no clue how proud I am to have made this image. 22:40, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I am proud of you too xD The ear-pink looks like a circle. A pink circle xD 22:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I suck at ear pink. 23:04, November 14, 2011 (UTC).

So awesome! But his description says he has patchy fur, which was on the tweak nomination page as something needing to be done. Also, I think since he was apparently so ragged that he was named for it, his lineart should be similar to Fuzzypelt's. 23:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not making the image like Fuzzypelt's. I'm sorry, but that would take way too long for me to even attempt to do it, and it would ruin what I have. I'll make the fur patchy, but that's about it. 23:44, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, like Thistleclaw's then? I dunno, it just seems like it would actually enhance the image to me. 23:46, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do. Thistleclaw's is a little more realistic, and easier for me to mimic. xD 23:48, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

His eye colour is white... 01:18, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know. I fixed it. The layer I keep the eye on was invisible. 01:19, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, that's some brightly coloured skin he's got there. Desaturate it a lot. 01:32, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I've never done a patched cat before. If you have a better color for me to use, please, let me know. 01:38, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Some of his skin is coming out of the lineart (and his body), since that is impossible unless his skin is ripped up, make it pelt color and if you want you can smudge the two colors together. This looks very nice. Well done. 02:05, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Patchy fur. Ragged fur. I'm confused... 02:21, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing just a biiiit, and make the patches of skin the same color as the earpink (pet peeve of mine :P) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  11:57, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

When she made the patched the same as the earpink she was told it was too bright. Not like he has irritated, red skin. ^^; 13:38, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not lightening it. He's a dark brown tabby. This is dark brown. =P 17:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it. He looks black, and it's hard to see the stripes. 21:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

You must be blind or something. He's dark brown. >.> Re-uploaded. 21:09, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was either Sandstar, Madclaw, Bramble, or Darkhallows. I have no idea which. Needed to be redone to match warrior image; it was in the tweak section, but I honestly don't know why, as the reason it was there was to be redone, so I redid it :3 Comments? <span style="">01:55 Tue Nov 15

I think the patches should be a tad paler. `<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 02:55, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">03:29 Tue Nov 15

Could you make the patch on her right (<---) shoulder go farther to ---> this side? On the warriors image, it's almost over on her left shoulder. You may need to move over the other patch that's on her other shoulder to make room for it. Sorry if that made no sense. And you don't have to do this, it' not that important, it'd just make it more consistent. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  06:48, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfur (Lo) ~ Redone
There were issues with this image that made it screams to be redone. xD OA is Icethroat. It looks darker, but it's not. Remember, I don't use highlights. ;) The other images probably HAVE highlights. xD 02:00, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's just dark because of the shading, but regardless, it needs to be lightened to match, no matter what's causing it to be dark. Just lighten the base coat, then you won't have to lighten the shading. Looks great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  11:55, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:10, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (E) - Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Spottedwing, then I'm guessing Nightfall101 tweaked it. Comments? 20:41, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, if any. 21:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink, please. :3 Awesome! 02:09, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Mosskit (Alt. Ki) - Redone
Needed to be dark grey instead of teal. OA was Sandy. 21:38, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think Mosskit was also described as a tom for this description. Give her a gray nose, slightly darker than her pelt color. Blur the chest and leg shading more. 22:22, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit. 00:32, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes(R) - redone
I apologize if it looks as if it was smudged by a monkey. The stripes needed to be redone and darker and so did the shading. OA=Hawkfire - 01:55, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

It all seems...pixlated? Perhaps blur it on an extrememly low rate. Also, blur the earpink a bit... Amazing! *steals* ;) 02:07, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) - Tweaked
This pretty much looks redone, but I DID tweak it. :P The white was placed in unnatural places, the patches needed to be smudged, and the shading needed to be defined. Ugh, I suck at torties. DX Anyways, OA was -Bracken I think. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:10, November 16, 2011 (UTC)