Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Nettleclaw ~ Silver Nomination
I added the only quote relating to him, and expanded his history as much as possible. Comments? 00:16, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the quote the main quote. 00:44, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Maybe detail his history a bit more. Looks good.^^ -- 19:01, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he's only seen in 1 sentence, so thats as good as I can do. And, the quote is better as a dialogue quote...so it can't be the main quote. 00:17, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes that could be added? I don't have the book, so I'm not sure. =P 03:07, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, none. 23:53, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The page looks good to me.

CBV? 23:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote's up! 01:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Shellheart - Silver Nomination
I added 2 quotes as well as adding a description and rewrote the second paragraph of BP. Comments? 22:24, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If you can, break up the paragraphs of the history in CP, expecially the first one. Other then that, this looks great! 05:12, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Done. 00:53, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a while since I've read BP, and I'm curious. Does Shellheart appear anywhere else aside from the little battle at Sunningrocks? If so, please elaborate. If not, this is an article that's very detailed, despite him only being in two books. 06:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I searched his name in BP on my kindle and found nothing, but, I'll look again. 00:44, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I searched the browse inside if anyone still cares, and he's only in the allegiances and pages 297, 298, 300, and 302 o3o 03:43, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just curious, are there any more quotes? 17:13, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I added two more. 21:01, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

His page looks splendid to me.

Due to nine days without comments, I put up the vote (plus I completely passed this one up and it'd be unfair to let other nominations go when this was ready). :3 01:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Flower (Lo) - Silver Nomination
Expanded as much as possible, I added the only quote about her, so comments? 01:37, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you mention how Flower came to join Sol earlier in the history? Otherwise this looks really nice. 02:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Done -ish, it 'twas always the first sentence. x3 01:24, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 23:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote's up. 01:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Pepper - Silver Nomination
Comments on issues other than quotes? =3 05:48, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Quotes are added. =3 02:36, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you find just one more quote, other than that, well done! 01:16, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the only quote that might've worked is stating that he's dead and honestly, I'd rather have two substantial quotes then have three quotes with one extremely poor one. x3. Anyways, thanks! 01:22, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Expand or detail his article in any way, shape or form? xD 21:53 Mon Jan 16

Nope, only what? Like 8 words about him? x3 01:40, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Woo! 8 words! Good 'nuff x3 01:47 Tue Jan 17

Possible to expand second paragraph?

Like I said if you read the comments above. No. I cannot detail or expand his history. Sure, I'd love to know how he got caught by the dogs whether it was a simple chase or whether, like Jake, a meteorite hit him in the head and the dogs started eating him. CBV? 23:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote's up. 01:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smoky - Silver Nomination
I'm determined. I rewrote a lot of the history (haven't worked that much on TFW, but there isn't much to do there), but I still have more to do with it. I just needed something more to work with. Yes, I'm about to deal with the quotes. Oh, and I don't want to hear anything about Sign of the Moon and why it doesn't have a section, because he wasn't listed in the allegiances for whatever reason. xP All right, then, comments? 19:58, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Seriosuly, he's perfect in my opinion! 23:33 Sat Jan 14

I agree, its great, but the main quote, in my opinion, doesn't show a lot of his personality, can you change it? 01:22, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, guys. Still not too confident about the main quote; I typed the rest of it in. The alternatives I had in mind are the first two in the quotes section. Of course, only the third part of the second one. 22:11, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. 21:42 Sun Jan 29

CBV? 23:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote's up. 01:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Morningmist ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? I've expanded as much as possible. 23:50, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes? 00:23 Sat Jan 14

None, thats all. 23:18, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBV? 23:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Vote's up! 01:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Willowstar ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? I added a quote and expanded. 00:50, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Anymore quotes? 00:26 Sat Jan 14

Nope, thats all she ever says. 23:15, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Patchfoot - Silver Nomination
I looked it over and it looks pretty good. It only needs an opening quote. I am looking through Firestar's Quest and I'm debating over, like four quotes to use. However if you figure one out, you are welcome to do so. 23:09, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I gave him bronze status. Just lettin' you know. Add some quotes if you can, and expand ''Firestar's Quest. 23:14 Sat Jan 14 ''

Is it possible at all to detail Beyond the Code? 23:19, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll look over. I haven't read Beyond the Code yet so I'd like some help with that. -- 23:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I can help, if you want. 23:55, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If possible, expand SkyClan's Destiny. And if there are like 3 quotes you don't use that are still good, then just make a quote section and add it in (but I assume you already knew that). :)

Did you get the stuff in there Quailflight? 21:07 Sat Jan 21

I wrote down so many notes....but I misplaced them....but I'll find them. I would need some help expanding SkyClan's Destiny though. 10:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Robinstar ~ Silver Nomination
There are no quotes I can use, but if it needs expanding or re-wording I'm all up to it! Comment? 23:46 Wed Jan 18

Make the quote the main quote? ;/ 00:35, Thu, Jan, 19, 2012

I don't think your supposed to use dialouge quotes for a main quote. 00:38 Thu Jan 19

Actually, a lot of cats have dialogue main quotes, so I think it would be fine. 13:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I'll add it in. 22:21 Thu Jan 19

Can you expand the last couple of sentences? Thanks.

Sure. 20:15 Sat Jan 28

I kind of meant just make the last sentence clearer. Thanks.

Looks good to me.

Thanks, done. 20:41 Sat Jan 28

Otterheart ~ Silver Nomination
Tehe. Comments? :P <span style="">01:00 Thu Jan 19

Withdrawing to pursue a different article :3 <span style="">22:22 Thu Jan 19

May I take this on? 03:04, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it bro! <span style="">00:56 Sat Jan 21

Guys, keep in mind that this is not PCA. Whether a nomination is withdrawn or declined doesn't change the fact that it's a silver nomination. In any case, it needs quotes and a bit of expanding. 01:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry. :/ <span style="">18:04 Sat Jan 21

...I just realized that I wouldn't be a help on this article. I don't have TFA, so I can't find quotes, and I can't expand it. Withdrawing. 00:25, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Mosspelt ~ Silver Nomination
Woo! I got Mosspelt! :P Comments? <span style="">22:23 Thu Jan 19

Possibly re-word Rising Storm. 02:34, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Done. <span style="">02:40 Sat Jan 21

Any references? I don't see very many tags. If you don't have those books, then that's understandable. Just a suggestion. 21:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Er, what do ya want me to cite? <span style="">01:15 Fri Jan 27

Can you expand Twilight at all? 07:02, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Or reword it? *hit "publish" a bit too fast x3* 07:03, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Done! <span style="">18:41 Sun Jan 29

Grasskit (CP) ~ Silver Nomination
The article looks good. I could expand her bio though, I guess. Comments? 02:47, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I expanded her bio some more, comments? 03:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

You mean history? :3 Add quotes if you can, even if their narrations. <span style="">21:18 Sat Jan 21

Yes, history. xD I added a main quote. It was the only quote I could find that had anything to do with Grasskit. xD 22:47, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe expand first paragraph? Other than there being no main quote it looks good to me.

I expanded it as much as possible already, but I'll see if I can do a bit more. -- 05:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Done. 05:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Shorty - Silver Nomination
I've been visiting his page as much as I can and I completely expanded his entire life in SkyClan's Destiny. I also added three quotes, and the main one was already there. The page is as beefed up as it can be, so i think it deserves it. ^^

Well done with the history. Is there a main quote that describes him more? If not, don't worry. 14:03, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Nice one Thistleshine! Can you find better quotes that describe his personality more in the quote section? (Oh, and by the way, you can put nominations at the end of the page, they don't have to be after one another :) <span style="">15:41 Sun Jan 29

Thanks so much you guys! I changed one of his quotes to a more important one in SkyClan's Destiny. Thanks again, I hope he gets silver! ^^ 07:27, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Join Request ~ Willowfern
Hi. Can I join...? ;.; Willowfern 03:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Of course, please take a look at the guidelines and if you have any questions, check out the FAQ. Welcome to the project. 06:37, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Welcome to the project! <span style="">01:00 Fri Jan 27

Welcome Willowfern! <span style="">01:17, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Burr
In the Warriors Adventure Game setting The Plaintive Howls, there is a rogue named Burr. I think this cat should get it's individual page. He should be considered a character, but because how he appears....I don't know if we should add him. Comments? 11:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it counts. If characters from The Warriors App count, this should too. 23:33, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Agreeable, but does he have a description?

Nevermind. That is PCA's job. But if other characters from the app have characters, so should he.

PCA's job is to provide characters with art, not a description. ;) 05:39, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Leaving
To all members of this project: I'm sorry, but I'm leaving the wiki. I know, by leaving, I'm being an irresponsible deputy, but the truth is, I already am. I know I haven't been as active as I used to be, and should be, but I do have a life, and its getting busier and busier. Through all my 1.5 years on this wiki, this project has always been one of my top 2 favorites, and its really hard to think that I'll never be able to nominate anything again, but who knows? Maybe once my life gets less busy, I'll rejoin. But, for now, I think this project needs a more active member to serve as deputy. I'm sorry for leaving, but this wiki is just too stressful for me. I'm sure that, with all PC's supporters and experienced members, this project will be just the same, or even better without me. Again, I'm so sorry for letting you all down, but I just don't have enough time for the wiki. 23:32, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

You haven't and are not an irresponsible deputy. You've been an inspiration to all users and have achieved so much. You are an amazing deputy and it's sad to think that we're losing you. Good luck in life, take as many opportunities as possible, and come back soon! :) 23:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Misty you were the best deputy ever! Thanks for helping me when I first joined! May StarClan light your path. 23:40, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Misty, you haven't been an irresponsible deputy. You did the best you could, if not, better. You'll be an important user that I wish this project wouldn't lose. We all have our own lives outside the wiki, which is understandable. I can't wait for you to return if you ever do, I'd be really glad to see you. Best wishes, and good luck in life, <span style="">23:52 Thu Jan 26

You all know very well that I haven't been nearly as contributive recently as I should have. It is my regrets to leave, but I think its for the good of the wiki and myself. I'll miss you guys. :( 00:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

We'll miss you too D: <span style="">00:57 Fri Jan 27

Bye Misty. You were a great inspiration for me, basically my PC idol. We'll miss you and we appreciate your work you have done for us so far. From me I give you my best of wishes for you. <span style="">01:28, Fri, Jan, 27, 2012

I know I haven't been here long, but I'll still miss you. Don't be so hard on yourself, you've been a great deputy, and we'll always be grateful for the work you've done for PC. I wish you the best of luck in life. 03:13, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Mistystar, I may have never known you that well, but I do know about your dedication and hard work. You were an amazing deputy of this project, leader of PW, and SW of PCA. That's something to proud of. No way are you irresponsible. Good luck, and I wish you the best in life. 14:21, January 27, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Leaving x 2
That's right, I'm quitting as well. I can't stand it. I couldn't stand making the decision. Ths wiki is family. I'm tearing apart all the bonds painfully... But I can't do it anymore. Life's stressful. I have to do something with my life. I know I haven't started high school yet, but I'm ambitious. I want to grow up and be something useful, like a doctor or a lawyer. And to do that, I can't do this wiki. I'm literally crying as I type this, this decision is so hard! But I'm afraid I'll have to carry through. Maybe I'll come back, but not too soon. I'll pop in once in a while on not-so-busy days. I used to love this Project, and I hope it continues strong. Thank you all, for the wondrous times I've had here. I know I'm being selfish, but I hope you understand. Thanks again, and I wish this wiki, the best of luck to succeed for the future. 03:39, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

We'll miss you just as much, SquirrelFlame. You've been a great WWikian, and all your work will be appreciated. I wish you the best in life, and that you do enter the career of your choice. And if you ever do get a chance to come back, we'd be happy if you did. :) 15:44, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

What!? No! Squirrel :(. I'll miss yu so much! Yuo did so much for me on PW and I'll never froget that. I wish you well in life <span style="">16:42 Fri Jan 27

Understandable. Hope to see you when you come on (even though you don't know me :) ).

Bye Squirrel. :( it must be a hard decision. Maybe in the future (20 years or so) we might see you become one of the best helpful person in the world (what ever job you get). You won't regret your decision and we will be so pround of you :). I look forward to seeing you come on wiki some time soon! <span style="">00:54, Sat, Jan, 28, 2012

Join Request
Hi can i join-- 19:47, January 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Sure! Atelda or Moonflight will come by and add ya in! <span style="">22:56 Fri Jan 27

Please read the guidelines and if you have any questions, take a look at the FAQ. Welcome to the project. 23:57, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Welcome to PC Moonshine. <span style="">01:14, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Onestar-Silver Nomination (again)
Comments?

Expand Firestar's Quest, Dawn, Fire and Ice, Forest of Secrets, The Darkest Hour, Eclipse, The Forgotten Warrior and The Fourth Apprentice. <span style="">23:44 Sun Jan 29

Dewstar(leaf)~join request
Hi, it's me, Dewstar(leaf) and I would like to join the project:Characters. Just saying, I think the users who are part of this project should write down when Jaypaw goes to ShadowClan. -- 00:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Sit tight! Atelda or Moonflight will drop by and add ya in! <span style="">01:13 Mon Jan 30

'kay, thanks! -- 01:14, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Welcome to the project, please read the guidelines and if you have any questions, take a look at the FAQ. 23:46, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Translated Character Names?
I know it's weird to see me making a proposal for a project I don't belong to, but hear me out. I'd like to propose that the translations of each character's name be added to a new section in each character article. It could just be at the bottom, in a chart that listed the language in one column and the translated names in another. I think it could be interesting, and I know we have members of this wiki that speak a language other than English primarily. In fact, to start off I have the names of most of the characters in German and English right here, here, here, here, here, here, and here. Just an idea. Putting it out there. 15:48, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think it'd be a great addition to the character articles. <span style="">16:00 Mon Jan 30

I think it's a good idea. 16:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. How many languages will be do? It seems like a good idea, though. 23:43, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It makes sense to me.

Probably all of those available if we do this. Honestly, I'm not sure about doing this due to the problem of having unknowing users and/or anons adding in names that could've come straight from google translate, or misleading us by putting something inaccurate in another language. Also, there are hundreds of characters, most minor characters, that might not be worth bothering with due to the fact that this is an English wiki. However, I would find the how the names differ from English interesting, and I do think this idea is intriguing, but there's also the alternative option of just expanding the Warriors Translations page. 23:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Atelda, there are so many characters, and we might as well just expand the Warriors Translations page. It is an interesting suggestion though. <span style="">04:55, Tue, Jan, 31, 2012

Maybe just list main and major characters on the translations page? Really, it's quite fascinating. Rusty was called Sammy in German. :3 04:59, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think taking the chart and separating the characters from it onto another chart would be the most helpful. The entire page could use some organization, but I think that would fall at least in part to Project Reality. 21:32, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I was thinking about that as well. Just make a new page containing the different translations of warrior names. The page could also fall into Project:World ^^. 23:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I agree. If this is going into another project, then we should discuss this on either PR or PW's talk page. <span style="">00:33, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Except it isn't. The translations of character names would still technically fall to us. I just pointed out that the rest of the page could be brought up to snuff by other projects as well. 00:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Join Request ~ Shellheart
I was thinking that, since I already to quite a bit of editing to character pages, I could be of some assistance here. Some. I only own the first 6 books, Moonrise, and SkyClan's Destiny. Anyway, would someone add me in and link me to the guidelines? 21:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Welcome, Shelly, here are the guidelines and if you have any questions you can refer to the FAQ. 23:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Welcome to the project! <span style="">23:31 Tue Jan 31

Welcome Shelly! <span style="">05:21, Thu, Feb, 2, 2012

Ciao
Hey everyone. Mind removing my name? I never did much for this project, but I'm really falling behind in the wiki right now. Sorry. 21:44, January 31, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Sorry to here that, Shadewing. I'll remove you momentarily. 23:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Bye Shadewing. <span style="">23:44 Tue Jan 31

Bye Shadey. :( <span style="">00:29, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

I'm sorry to see you go, but thanks for the work you've done here. Bye, Shadewing. 02:45, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Chirp~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote and two other quotes. Comments? 23:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Add another quote if ya can please. <span style="">23:41 Tue Jan 31

Honestly, the quotes currently up don't have much to do with his personality. I'd advise either swap them with ones that do pertain to his personality or delete them altogether. The history could also use a bit of an expansion, for example, what the reaction in the barn is when Chirp and Merry come through after a bout of barking from the dogs. 23:44, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC)- Silver Nomination
I think he should be nominated. I stick up for all the SkyClan cats. -headdesk- Anyways, I worked on the SkyClan's Destiny section again and added some quotes. I think it deserves it. :3 00:07, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

He's already been granted silver status. It says so on his talkpage. Though I may be wrong. <span style="">00:16 Wed Feb 1

I'm afraid it is Thistleshine. I checked through all the Silver Nominations on the Project Operations Forum page. Sorry. <span style="">00:50, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

It's alright Thistle. ;) Make sure to always check the talk page of the character, and see what grade it it. ;) 05:38, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Join Request ~ Thistleshine
Why hello! Thanks for reading. I really want to join this and make more of a difference in the Wiki, I am and try to be very mature about it. I've already been editing some pages, and I think it would be fun and interesting to be a part of PC. Thanks~ 00:21, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Please read the guidelines and check out the FAQ if you have any questions. Welcome to the project. 23:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tess - Silver Nomination
Meh. I haven't really been doing a lot of nominations. Anyways, I basically redid the history. There are no quotes she says except for the main quote, unless you want me to add in the one where Willie is introducing the rogues. Comments? <span style="">00:43, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Could you elaborate on when it says that she was seen in a flashback. Like, what was she doing in the flashback? Anyways, nice job. 00:46, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly reword the first paragraph of Shattered Peace? 02:42, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sunpelt (LC) ~ Silver Nomination
-has been meaning to do this- I added the only quotes I could find and changed all past tense words to present tense words, seeing as that's how most articles and character pages are written...Comments? 04:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Good job! I think you should change the main quote to another quote, as main quotes are supposed to show the character's personality or characteristics, and that main quote doesn't really show, and it's kinda plain. 05:35, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I re-wrote the main text of the article so it flows better. It had way too many grammatical errors. Hope that helps. 05:43, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Expand SotC please. <span style="">16:34 Wed Feb 1

I don't think SotC can be expanded much further without repeating the story word-for-word. It goes over everything that happens. 16:42, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes? And personally, I think the extra quote you have ("You have done a great service for the forest") would be a better main quote. But the history looks good. 17:22, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Willowbreeze - Silver Nomination
Yay, I got Willowbreeze. Comments? 16:59, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand BotC if you can, if not, detai lher appearence please! <span style="">21:43 Thu Feb 2

Detailed it as much as I could. I reread that part of BotC, she didn't appear any more, mostly because Hailstar couldn't tell the difference between her and Graykit/pool. xD 02:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Silverpaw (BotC) ~ Silver Nomination
I couldn't find any quotes on him/her, and I believe it looks pretty good. Comments? 20:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand and detail her appearence please. <span style="">21:46 Thu Feb 2

Her appearance is unknown. 22:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)