Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 62

Onestar - Silver Nomination
Only certain parts of the history needed to be expanded. Since it was the content drive, I fixed what was needed. DON'T tell me to expand Dawn, because I will hurt you. Comments? 23:39, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

His page is really good, expand Fire and Ice a bit. 15:42, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Outcast too please! 16:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

If possible could you expand Long Shadows and Sunset? 21:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I couldn't really expand POT, but I was able to expand Fire and Ice. 21:45, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a way you could expand Fading Echoes? Maybe he said something important when he was "unconvinced." But I'm not sure. 04:06, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the Cats of the Clans section? 17:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

The "c" in "a clan" in the second quote under the Quotes section should be capitalized, I think.

Clan isn't capitalized all of the time, believe it or not. Not sure why, but it happens quite a lot... 16:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's just a frequently-made typo. I know I forget to capitalize "Clan" a lot when I write fan fiction. Anyway, in the Firestar's Quest section, could you change the hyphen to a comma, and instead of saying "his territory" change it to "WindClan's territory"? 02:41, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Dawn. 04:19 Sun Nov 20 I forgot about being hurt. ^^ 04:24 Sun Nov 20

Are you still working on this, Icy? 00:06, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Its been a month. Declined. 00:08, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail ~ Silver Nomination
I've been working on this for a while I guess. Comments? 23:27, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you re-write these direct quotes because your supposed to avoid direct quotes: "brave Rosetail, and that their kits were safe thanks to Yellowfang." (In the Into The Wild section) and "Poppydawn! No! Don't leave me!" (In Cats of the Clan section) 23:34, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Expand BP please. 02:15, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Done, I also realised I forgot the main quote, so I added that in. 03:51, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, it looks great! :D 03:55, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks XD! 07:41, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Secrets of the Clans please. 18:16, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded Secrets of the Clans. 05:44, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Put what codes she was mentioned in, it doesn't say in the Code of the Clans section. 17:21, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the Code of the Clans section flow a bit more? Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:01, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Could Bluestar's Prophecy be elaborated a little bit? I see quite a few one sentence/two sentence paragraphs. If not, I understand - it's not possible. xD 17:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Done, and Cloudy, I understand where you're coming from. I tried to make sure every paragraph had at least three sentences in them, but if something doesn't make sence, just point it out. ;) 02:51, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful job, OwlXGlitter4EVER. The article looks wonderful. 05:06, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you find a better main quote? 23:57, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to use a quote from the quotes section? Or a new one? 05:06, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

A new one if you can find a new one. But if you can't, just pick one from the quote section. 23:56, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure what to use for the main quote. I found some new quotes, but put them in the quotes section. Like any of those? 04:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Use the one that says how brave she is. That's the only one that reflects upon her personality - the one that's up there now is just showing her grief for her mother. 15:37, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

This one? 04:48, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, thats fine. CBV? 23:13, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, since there are only 4 votes up at the moment, I'll put it up now. 23:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Greenflower ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded her history and added all of the quotes relevant to her. Comments? 10:04, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a few mistakes. Looks great though! 11:26, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I added a couple links. Other then that minor issue, this looks excellent for such a minor character. Job well done, Speckle. 15:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Should the "c" in "half-clan" be capitalized in the second paragraph? Otherwise, looks nice!

Done 16:08, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Deatil her appearance if you can't expand her appearance. 23:52, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think II can add anymore to her history without making it repetitive. 23:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more links without being redundent? 23:42 Sun Nov 20

Done. 22:46, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 00:06, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all of the history. Comments? 00:02, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I forgot the quotes. I'm adding them in now. 00:03, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the first paragraph of Dark River if possible? 05:15, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've changes a few typos in Dark River and Long Shadows if anyone hadn't noticed them. xxx --CloudtailxBrightheart 09:40, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :3 I can't break up Dark River because the first paragraph is all from the prologue. 01:11, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Expand/Detail ''Long Shadows. ''22:27 Thu Nov 17

Done. 23:49, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Capitalize "ancients" in the Dark River section. 20:24, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Done. CBV? 23:27, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Snowtuft - Silver Nomination
First nomination here. I don't know if it's possible to add quotes, but if you want, I'll try. Comments? 01:55, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Suggestion: When someone edits an article, don't undo what they did. Usually, it makes the article better. Also, yes, there should be at least one quote. Find a narrator quote if he doesn't have any speaking parts. 01:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't know I undid the edit, I thought it was just some edit conflict by some random user. Sorry, i will look out for that in the future. Anyways, I'll try to find a quote. 02:23, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...the first section seems somewhat blunt. Fill that in and try to make it flow like the story. Otherwise, it looks great. 05:13, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I looked through the books to see when he was mentioned, and I added some quotes of the times he was mentioned. He isn't seen that often though, so it's kind of hard to add quotes on him. 06:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The quotes are fine, but the last quote needs a description. 01:24, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Added a description for the last quote. 23:44, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Expand ''Night Whispers. ''And if you can't, detail it :P 23:38 Sun Nov 20

I don't know if I can expand that much..., but I tried. 06:16, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 00:06, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:20, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart's Grandfather ~ Silver Nomination
He's a minor character, his history is about as detailed and expanded as possible, and there is a main quote. I'll continue to work on finding quotes, but otherwise... :3 05:13, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, this article is pretty good. I don't know if I can say anything, since you're looking for quotes. 06:15, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add in a few more details to the last part about what Mapleshade says about him, and add in the other quotes. Great work! 01:21, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Done :3. 23:31, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 23:35, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 23:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)