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Pipsqueak (GC) - For Approval
Pipsqueak the pirate. ouo

I think the shading is leaking on the <--- forearm where the white meets the black belly fluff? I love this pattern! 19:38, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I got it?

Dotty (GC) ~ For Approval
I'm not sure if the larger ginger patches would need stripes. 16:56, 11/30/2017

Re-uploaded. Changed the pattern. 17:47, 11/30/2017

In regards to your question: we used to say that adding stripes to ginger-and-white patched cats (people being picky+art style changes haven't shown this recently) was a choice, depending on patch size and all of that nonsense. I'd say we'll still abide by that. Plus, you can only add so many stripes on an image.

Ah thank you! Okay. I just wasn't so sure it'd be allowed or not. I did a google search for ginger and white cats, and most had tabby stripes on the ginger. So I just added it. 18:25, 11/30/2017

Well, just because google says something, doesn't mean we abide by it. While stripes are mandatory on solid ginger cats, when they have something else, it's a bit different. It's the same as a tortie that has ginger; stripes are not mandatory on torties who have specified ginger parts as well. It's an optional thing as far as I'm aware.

Cobweb (GC) - For Approval
I love him. Too bad my new pen isn't here yet so he looks ugly >.>'; 17:15 Thu Nov 30

Reuploaded I lightened the shading. Still hideous since I suck at blurred shading, but its a little better. 17:18 Thu Nov 30

Define the shading depth. Cool! 22:13, 11/30/2017

Reuploaded 00:40 Fri Dec 1

Could you make the eyes more green? They look a little blue to me right now. Could you also define the ear pink a little bit? 01:58, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think it's an aqua green. The shade of green wasn't specified so I think it's okay. 03:23, 12/01/2017

Actually, the cite for him having green eyes was talking about Fierce, not Cobweb. Eye color is now Sunjaw's choice.

Reuploaded This looks better. 15:43 Fri Dec 1

Mittens (GC) ~ For Approval
probably gonna redo some parts of this lmao 17:46, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the tail. 17:51, 11/30/2017

Smooth out the shading on the tail. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 19:18, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

what shading on the tail? 19:41, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Near the start of it by the leg. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 19:50, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 20:19, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

I love the pattern. :) Define the shading overall, it's a bit hard to make it out from the darker pattern. Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 22:48, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 06:47, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading just a little bit more?

reuploaded "model it after jinkies. she's your cat, it'll be easy as." -famous last words 19:41, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Feather (GC) - For Approval
White GC it is then 21:02, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a touch? everyone is using the long-haired blanks xD 21:10, 11/30/2017

Perhaps lighten and smooth the shading a bit, define it on the back hind paw closest to us. 21:42, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the head. This is good :) 22:49, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! i know :^) 01:46, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Peanut (GC) - For Approval
these blanks turned out lovely. appearance is based off of my cat. 21:41, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

There is an image to match Patch. <span style="">21:44, 11/30/2017

oh! lol i didn't even notice! i'll reupload in a bit. 21:49, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. all right, there we go. 22:03, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Boots (GC) ~ For Approval
Comments? 22:03, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

He seems a tad too..red? Maybe lighten the shading a touch. <span style="">22:14, 11/30/2017

Reuploaded. How's this? 22:19, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

He still looks red to me. Maybe make it more brown? 01:47, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink looks orange. make it just a few shades redder?

Reuploaded. Colorpicked from Husker, cause why not? 02:59, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

What is that dark red line on his eye? Is it a scar? <span style="">03:29, 12/01/2017

Yes, it is. 03:34, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Is that scar allowed to be there? He isn't specified with any scars, and he could've lost the eye due to an infection. I'm not sure about the missing fur around the eye either. <span style="">03:38, 12/01/2017

The scars are fine and I think it's artist's choice in this case as to whether or not to add them. I've seen this on other images. Boots doesn't have an eye; it's not just gonna be a blank socket as far as I'm aware. There's bound to be at least some scarring around it, regardless of how he lost it. It doesn't say he's blind in that eye, it says he doesn't have the other eye. I'd be more surprised if there wasn't scarring.

can u add some more depth to the shading and maybe the eye socket itself 19:28, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:41, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Dovewing (GC) - For Approval
while doing the shading i realized halfway through i was using the wrong brush sorry if it looks weird lmao. also, don't these need to be added to the shading tutorial thing?

will reups for green eyes in a min pls don't comment on that

reups

Smooth out the shading a bit more 00:27, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups just took the blur tool over the entire thing. rip

There's a speck of waste outside --> haunch. <span style="">01:05, 12/01/2017

Try defining the eye depth and/or expanding the pupil--that may help with the eyes.

reups the pupil is supposed to be small. if someone else agrees, i'll widen them a bit, but slit eyes are my favorite :^(

Perhaps desaturate the shading just a tad. And I will be adding these once I get the pen for my tablet. <span style="">01:48 Fri Dec 1

Could you define the eye depth again? --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:50, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups okay I KNOW I'm really annoying for this... but can I get a second opinion for the eye depth? honestly I can see it just fine and I think it's really clear as a transition from light to dark. it is my image so I'm probably just biased lmao

I think the eye depth's fine imo. Anyways, I don't think the smoky parts have texture on the other images? I'm probably wrong though. Could you define the ear pink as well? 01:56, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Eye depth is fine.

reups the choice of ear pink color was not a good one for this pelt color

I actually think the eye depth could be defined a bit, and might the transition to lighter/darker colors in the eyes be softened a bit? It seems a little too abrupt and sharp, and could probably be blurred or smudged or something.

seems to be a little shading leaking from the foreleg closest to us (near the top of it) and the base of the tail. 19:29, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups I have not once blurred or smudged my eyes, but ok. (i'm sorry if i'm salty it's been quite a day. merry christmas)