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Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
Shading is annoying. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed out and define the dark splotch on her ear?Broken_Foot

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 17:52, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth shading some more and define it on the legs? 19:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:41, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little more, define the light on the legs and tail. 20:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:42, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little. Also, I think the belly shading should extend further ---> way, towards where the haunch overlaps the underbelly. 22:24, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a bit? 23:40, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you move the splotch more on the ear and define it? It kind of blends in with the shading on the side of the head 01:10, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:54, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on both front legs and the back one farthest from us, and smooth out the shading a bit? 17:41, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's a little piece on the belly near the hips where the shading is missing. 22:47, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the belly and a little way above the base of the tail 00:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit dark.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:10, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the <-- front leg near the lineart. 14:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The waste is still there :/ and I think shading could be lightened and smoothed some more  15:06, April 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * The shading darkness is fine, Snow. But I do agree on the smoothing of it 02:05, 4/10/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Not to be rude, but I cannot tell the difference between each of your uploads. I noticed only little to no change to your image. Excuse me if I come off rude, but I really can't tell the differenceBroken_Foot

Smooth the shading.

Just thought I'd point out that the waste is still there- right below the belly, and a little at the top of the image above the tail 23:59, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's a reddish marking on the lower part of the belly that I don't think is supposed to be there. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:10, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:46, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste around the whole image 22:34, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I'm pretty sure all the waste is gone now. ErmineGlow (talk) 12:35, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still waste around the muzzle and tailtip 13:36, 4/14/2017

I think there's still waste around the <-- paw closest to us too.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:04, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail 21:21, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:34, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the splotch on the ear? It's looking a little hard-edged. 19:45, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and expand it on the face. Also, maybe slightly expand the flank shading.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 18:06, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more, I can't hardly make it out. As well as defining the shading depth, and add some more light on the front legs 20:23, 4/17/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:42, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more 01:20, 4/19/2017

Reups Egg salad ErmineGlow (talk) 02:44, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking almost everywhere and still needs to be smoothed out. 02:46, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:16, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups again noticed some waste ErmineGlow (talk) 14:19, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

There's still waste all around the image Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:28, April 22, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reups I think that the waste is gone now. ErmineGlow (talk) 14:33, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

The shading could still be smoothed out a lot

The base colour looks reddish? 19:38, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Don't really know why the base looks reddish. The hex code is #292323 ErmineGlow (talk) 23:16, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Well, that's probably because #292323 isn't actually a pure gray and does have a bit of a reddish tinge. I'm not saying you have to, but you can desaturate it completely and use the gray color with the same value, which is #292929. Regardless, I think the shading could still be smoothed more. 20:44, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:48, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is leaking away from the lineart pretty much everywhere, and the shading could be smoothed out, especially on the tail and legs

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:03, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

Shading still leaking, and shading still needs to be smoothed

To tell the truth, I'd prefer not to smooth out the shading anymore, because how the image is shaded now is how I want the image to look. However, I can still smooth it out if someone else thinks it should be. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:12, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

I still think it needs to be smoothed out. I can only tell a slight difference from the first upload, and what I think most of us were trying to achieve with our comments was for there to be more of a gradient. Not that we want butter smooth shading- because that's not a requirement - but what we are looking for is for it to look less blocky and fade out like real shading. I know that people have styling preferences, but this really looks sharp and needs to have some type of gradient that fades out.

Reups I'm not entirely sure if this is better, but it looks better than last upload. At least on my computer. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more 23:10, 4/26/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:52, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste around the head and tail 13:39, 4/27/2017

There's also some waste along the chest and <- front leg and a little bit by the back

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:03, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the ---> side of the... side and the hind leg closest to us. 00:33, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

The gray still isnt pure gray, saturate the color to remove the red tinge. 01:30, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall. 02:11, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I was told that I didn't have to change the type of gray earlier ErmineGlow (talk) 02:25, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like there's line of darker shading on the body by the back leg, could you smooth that out a bit?

Define the light a tad? 23:36, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 02:07, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

The line still looks sharp, and could you make the shading on the tail a little lighter? It looks darker than the rest of the shading

Reups Look better? ErmineGlow (talk) 15:34, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

It still looks like a line, and the tail shading didn't change

Reups Facepalm totally forgot about the tail shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 20:51, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Shading's leaking away from the lineart on the backside of the cat, I think

Amberclaw (Star) - For Approval
-cringes- rip shading and eye color 00:07, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading and eye depth. Also, can you make the stripes on the forehead a bit thicker to match the other images? And is the nose filled in? 00:11, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

I think they're thick enough, but it is an approval page. Define the earpink, and the shading on the tail? Also, the nose is filled in 00:15, 4/20/2017

reups 00:40, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading pretty much everywhere besides the tail, quite a bite. 00:42, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste near the ear and front paws 00:55, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

reups shading seems a lil dark but I dunno and I think I got rid of the waste 00:58, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth more ErmineGlow (talk) 01:17, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could be expanded on the belly.

I think there would be a little shading behind the <-- arm (I rlly hope you know where I'm talking about)  also define shading depth a little

This is beautiful! I would smudge/blur the shading on the ear a little. 16:32, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pupil slightly - I can see it, but it's a little hard to make out

i dunno if I can still make comments since I'm technically no longer in PCA anymore but could you smooth out -> earpink a bit? 20:23, 4/20/2017

reups the belly shading. yikes. 21:17, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

The belly shading could really be expanded and the shading could use some smoothing out.

This can be for approval, since you seem to know what you're doing. :) 15:29, 4/21/2017

reupz ^aH yay ! 23:25, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth and smooth it out everywhere but the flank. 06:33, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

reups 13:56, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's still some waste near the ---> ear. 15:32, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the stripes just a touch, as they seem darker on the other images. Also, define the shading depth

reups 17:16, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 19:48, 4/23/2017

The shading could be darkened and defined a bit, imo.

The shading is leaking almost everywhere, especially the cheek, chest and tail. 05:15, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's still some waste near the ---> ear and in the space between the front paws 17:28, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

Imo the color of the stripes looks a little off, a little too dark, and the earpink looks a little  too light

still working, my time is very limited atm 21:38, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

reups 22:00, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not seeing any changes in the file from the previous upload. Make sure you don't upload an older version of the image! ^^ 22:43, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

reups i matched the base and the stripes to the kit a bit more 22:59, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

You should be matching to the warrior, since that was the first image. Base looks too light, stripes too dark, earpink too light

reups adjusted to warrior 00:11, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

Very minor, but the last stripe on the <--- paw slopes upward, not downward, if that makes sense. 00:36, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

reups 20:12, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth 00:34, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
*Cringes at attempt to texture*

Smooth out the shading and define the texture a small bit. Looks nice! 22:13, 4/22/2017

the white has texture too. 22:38, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

re-up There was texture on the white, it was just too light. *Cringes at the rhyme.*

Smooth out the shading a bit more.

There's shading leaking on the belly near the <--- front leg 16:06, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the texture a tiny more 19:51, 4/23/2017

Leaking outside the lineart or what, Vec?

Not necessarily outside the image, but there's flank shading missing (or leaking as a result of blurring and such) away from the <--- leg. Near the elbow. I hope this helps. 00:12, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks! ^^

re-up Why won't you smooth out, texture? Why?

Can you smooth out the flank and chest shading some?

Smooth the face shading some too. 20:43, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

The texture looks like a bunch of scattered lines 0.0 00:12, 4/25/2017

re-up If this doesn't work I dunno what will. It looks too blurred out and then on here it looks sharp. I think Gimp's lying to me.

Can you smooth out the flank and chest shading some?

I think the shading is leaking on the rear end by the brown, as it looks kind of odd  23:14, 4/26/2017

re-up Better?

The flank shading looks a little blotchy at some places. Pretty! :) 00:37, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

re-up This is not what I was expecting. ..

Smooth the face shading 23:37, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Meow meow meow meow meow x 1000000000 because I saw kitties today and one's named shadow and he looks like Tallstar and Crowfrost and I wanna name him Shadowfrost or Shadowtail lmao.

I don't know if its the shading but both of the earpinks look like a different color to me. Also, maybe smudge the beginning of them too? Very pretty(: 20:52, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

It's shading, Crow. Also, smudging ear pink is not mandatory on any blank, therefore Starlight is welcome to blur the edges of the ear pink as well.

This doesn't have a date on the reservation table 01:30, 5/02/2017

Fixed and re-upped Lol I forgot I was probably busy with one thing or another.

Beech Tail (Ki) - For Approval
I did it, yes.  ShineC♉♏et   16:31, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Define the shading on the right leg. Maybe define the earpink a little? 15:42, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  ShineC♉♏et   16:39, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the --> leg?

Reuploaded  ShineC♉♏et   08:39, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

Recede the shading a little on the chest and head? 22:16, 4/25/2017

Reuploaded  ShineC♉♏et   14:12, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the --> front leg?

Smooth out the shading on the chest and head a little, too? 01:38, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded – 07:25, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink ErmineGlow (talk) 12:51, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded – 13:11, April 27, 2017 (UTC) Maybe?

Define the tail shading a little more <span style="">13:38, 4/27/2017

Reuploaded – 15:02, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps define the stripes that are under the shading 23:38, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out just a little more on ---> leg and also on the line of shading above <--- leg? I really like this, by the way. 13:49, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded – 14:48, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Conekit (Ki) ~ For Approval
This turned out better than I thought. 20:30, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Define the shading, smooth it out, define the shading depth, smudge the patches, smudge the ear pink. 20:38, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Is your light from <-- way? I don't want to be super picky with source and all, but the tail contradicts the light source. Light's from <-- way but the shading shows that it's not, and I think the tail shading should be swapped to the other side.

Reuploaded Thanks! And yes, the shading is from the <--- way. 20:49, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry to persist, but if the shading's from <-- way like you say, wouldn't the shading for the tail be moved to the other side? The way it is now, it contradicts the light source, as just that part says that the light is hitting from the other direction while the rest of it does not.

What? Now I'm confused. You just told me to move it to the other side earlier, and I did. Now are you telling me to move it back? Not meaning to sound rude, but which way does it go? 20:54, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

It's correct now. I was looking at your past upload. The upload history shows that you uploaded twice after your original post, and at the time I commented for the second time, your older revision was still showing. So, sorry about that, as I looked at it when it was uploaded for the second revision, after you commented, but before the change had been made.

Well done :) Second image since the first was approved :) Smooth out the shading on the head near the <--- ear? <span style="">21:18, 4/24/2017

Reuploaded Thanks! :) 21:25, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge out the patches more.

Reuploaded 22:52, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

blur/smudge earpink some more.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:08, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Blur shadow on tail – 09:47, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:50, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, it looks really flat. User:Homosneksual/sig 00:43, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:55, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

The way you smoothed the patches looks blotchy. Make sure there are defined spaces between them, and that one side of a patch isn't more blurry than the other, if that makes sense? 23:40, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:05, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

I believe the shading is leaking away from <-- cheek fluff and could you smooth out the ankle markings and face shading please

Reuploaded 04:11, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste all around the head. Also, the shading seems quite blotchy and disconnected, and that it blends into the gray patches so it looks like one big gray patch. 20:44, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:21, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Purdy (Star) - CBA
Why kill off Purdy of all characters?? <span style="">19:13 Thu Apr 27

I have no doubt it was to please the fans because he was "older than the hills". Smooth out the muzzle shading a little? <span style="">19:55, 4/27/2017

This is amazing, define the shading a bit? (I'm always commenting about shading lol) Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:55, April 27, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reuploaded They killed off some of my faves man -.- SS was heart wrenching. I also added more scruff to him so he would be a little more rugged. <span style="">22:26 Thu Apr 27

at least he wasn't murdered ;^( can you define the tail shading a little? 19:43, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

There is a bit of green around his eyes or maybe that's just my screen KatsCandy (talk) 05:03, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

The green is rheum, because he has rheumy eyes. 05:24, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

On the other images the tear in --> ear isn't on the tip it's only on --> side of the ear and idk if the rheum is covering it (my apologies if it is) but on the kittypet image the scar is much more noticeable, besides those minor things this looks really well-done!

Might just be my screen, but could you make the scar on his nose a little more visible please? I still can't get over my poor baby's death. 19:21, April 30, 2017

Skiddley, please don't repeat comments. 19:32, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

I fixed all the stuff to the best of my ability considering the rheum has to me there, just need to wait for the wifi to get working again. <span style="">19:43 Sun Apr 30

Reuploaded I hate wifi sometimes. <span style="">20:37 Sun Apr 30

CBA?

Jessamy (KP) - For Approval
I colorpicked from the currently being approved rogue image so that if these both get accepted, they won't need to be tweaked for matching color. 01:29, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 01:45, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth, and @Shypaw, they could be going for a sharp shading look.

Smoothing out the shading wouldn't hurt though.

reups I wasn't really going for sharp shading, but I liked how it turned out :^P Smoothed it a tad. 01:54, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad more on her foreleg and her haunch? 13:53, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

reups 15:06, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

My laptop decided to explode and I lost the layers for this. Wish me luck :^)) 21:46, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:25, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups 03:04, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Patch Pelt (Ki) - CBA
Newtspeck didn't have stripes before she was cited tabby, so I'm kinda following that ruling. Not entirely sure if I like this, I might redo it tomorrow. Spoopy baby.

can you define the shading?

Re-uploaded. I like this one better.

Define the shading and shading depth 00:33, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I cannot define it any more than this without a.) changing my light source (which I am not required to do) and b.) distorting the pattern that I have.

Shouldn't the tail shading be on the other side? 01:58, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, for god's sake. Literally all of my kits use this exact same source, including the one I just got approved right before this. As I have said before, there is more than one source for an image, and this one has not only been used by me, but countless others over the span of the years we've had the kit blanks. I am not changing it.
 * okay sorry 02:08, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Flamenose (W) - CBA
i'm terrible at matching stripes. 02:58, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a lil? 04:25, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not sure if that did anything. 14:57, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs 23:43, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:29, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

The other image looks a little brighter

I believe they're the same color, it's just the shading and highlights. 04:53, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''they should be the same color as I colorpicked from his StarClan. I brightened the red a tad and added a little more texture. 20:34, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

I like this a lot, so CBA?

Reedwhisker (Rogue) ~ For Approval
very filthy repost, I apologize if I break a rule or anything for this --

Not sure if you are or not, but if not, smooth the shading and define the light. 04:48, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

You aren't breaking a rule, Neon. We do not tell users they cannot repost unless they break the one month rule.

Define the ear pink? 20:20, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried lightening it to contrast against his black fur, so it'd pop out and be more visible --

Does the ear pink match the other images? The pink in the deputy looks lighter than this. 14:56, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the image?

Night (ES) (D) ~ For Approval
This was fun to make. First attempt at a texture, and I actually like how this turned out :D <span style="">04:15, 4/29/2017

This is real cool :^> The chin on the other images is black. 04:17, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Also, you either forgot the ear pink or it's very invisible :P 04:24, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Tfw you forget the earpink and don't realize <span style="">04:33, 4/29/2017

Is that bluish shading, or do I see some weird bright patch by the belly? --

It's tinted shading, and that's the white patch I believe is on the early settler version <span style="">04:42, 4/29/2017

Perhaps smooth the shading just a tad? 04:47, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Changes might not show <span style="">05:03, 4/29/2017

Could you smooth out the black chin? It looks really blocky. ErmineGlow (talk) 19:24, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

the white on the neck should extend out a bit more 19:28, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Not sure if this is what you meant, because I'm super tired and can't understand that good rn, but yea.... <span style="">22:22, 4/29/2017

Smooth the head shading? 23:43, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! This was a bit of a hassle because GIMP went haywire and stuff, and I got lazy since it's Saturday, but whatever lol <span style="">03:16, 4/30/2017

Shouldn't the white extend all the way down to the belly? Or is it just angled so that you can't see it?

it only goes to around the beginning of the belly area, since the loner is first in the set. can you lighten the shading on it while we're at it though, I can barely see it. 15:08, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

So the white should be expanded down to the beginning of the belly?

Add some shape to the facial shading

Re-uploaded! Excuse my unactiveness lately, usually I'm on here all the time <span style="">21:26, 4/30/2017

Maybe smooth that little line of shading on the neck? Looks nice. 00:57, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Ahh, thank you! <span style="">21:26, 5/01/2017

Batear (DF) — For Approval
Okay, so super sorry for being gone so long. We got rid of our computer and our laptop isn't good for charart. This is my first attempt at art on my iPad, and I really hope it's not a big hassle or needs a ton of work. Also, I accidentally made File:Batear.df.PNG with with the capitalized PNG, so if someone could delete that... :) 05:24, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

How do you do that? Anyways, define earpink? --

Define the shading 14:55, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

I used an app, the same one as Jayie does :) Reuploaded 18:01, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Crop the image a bit? 00:20, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:47, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-Reuploaded I felt like smudging the white. :) 00:58, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Which app? Define the shading Rainbowmistake (talk) 02:41, May 1, 2017 (UTC)chat

ArtStudio. Reuploaded 02:49, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

The white is really bright, mind toning it down a smol bit? --

White is white, Neon. If she changes it, it'll be black-and-gray, not black-and-white.
 * Psst, Snowed, I am a he, not a she. :) 13:57, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Anyways, yeah idk about toning it down...I used pure white and smudged it out. Once I saw how cool it looked when the white contrasted with the black like that, I wanted to keep it that way. If someone else agrees, though, I guess I can change it... 23:57, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Nah, it looks cool. Though it does look sharp around the belly area.

Reuploaded. 00:33, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

This is just a suggestion, but you could add more scars to his face. ErmineGlow (talk) 03:39, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:55, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Leafstorm (Star) ~ For Approval


I think the stripes might need to be softened a little around the edges and maybe smooth the shading too. Also, there might be a little bit waste under the paws. 10:35 Sun Apr 30 2017

Re-uploaded

There's some waste near the ---> ear and in the circle the tail creates. Looking good! ^^ 15:02, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

They look cross-eyed 18:17, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Vec! @Danny In all honesty, I used the same pupils for every one of my StarClan cat images.

Is the entire back in shadow? It looks darker than the elbow and <- side of the tail, also the stripes look more dense on the deputy

Adding onto my previous comment, maybe make the dorsal stripe thicker to help make stripes look more dense

Re-uploaded ????? the back is not in shadow??

I didn't REALLY think the back was in shadow I just don't know why the elbow is lighter than the rest of the image.. is it a highlight?

On the deputy, it looks the legs are paler than the rest of the pelt, so I think it's just that way to match.

So do i change anything...? they're highlights, btw

Rippleclaw (E) ~ For Approval
This needs some work

I think there's texture on the other images? ErmineGlow (talk) 20:55, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit; they seem rather solid compared to the others, especially the StarClan image. 20:56, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

I know it's probably just me, but this seems almost white <span style="">21:43, 4/30/2017

Reuploaded Stripes look too soft I think.. And ya it does seem white but it's the same color as the other images

Oh that's weird I didn't see ErmineGlow's comment. Yeah I couldn't tell if there was texture or not

There's texture, I'm pretty sure of it. 22:35, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ooh I'm excited that the texture actually somewhat resembles texture bc I had no idea what I was doing

Hello yes OA of the warrior image here. There's a lot of texture on that. I may or may not have been experimenting when I tried that image. The stripes are also drawn on with a size one brush and smudged; these stripes are a bit too smooth. Also, the base is meant to be this pale, Broken, since he's silver-and-black, not gray-and-black. Also brighten up the ear pink a bit.

Reuploaded Ayy I feel like this is comin along nicely :D, I forgot to check which image came first so I was mostly tryin to copy the starclan image, hence the smoother stripes, lack of texture, and wrong color earpink. Tomorrow I'll define texture a lil more and adjust the facial stripes

Smooth out the stripes more. They look too sharp, compared to other images. --

If she does smooth them, they'll need to be smudged, not blurred; remember, Neon, warrior is first in this set.

Idk if it's just me, but the shading seems a little flat. Also, define the light a little on the face? 20:24, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wooow texture is fun

Shading on tail could be defined.

Could you define the shading overall? —  Minkclaw   19:50, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Shinecloud (W) - For Approval
08:09, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

I love this. Can you define shading a tad —  Minkclaw   15:56, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:09, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more, especially on the legs. 21:31, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't want to make the shading much darker. This image is already quite a bit darker than her other images, and all the colors are all the same 02:46, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Thrushwing (Star) - For Approval
16:24, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the head shading a bit, I love your style <3 Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:20, May 1, 2017 (UTC)Chat

the dark brown right by the nose should extend up a bit more, it goes past the eye on the warrior. (sorry if I'm not making sense I'm very tired) 01:33, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw(A) ~ For Approval
Tonypaw (talk)

The image isn't there. 02:50, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

think i got itTonypaw (talk) 02:53, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest and behind the front leg a bit. Not bad at all. 02:54, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste between the two whiskers on the left side of the face, our left. 02:56, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

done i hopeTonypaw (talk) 03:02, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Is this your first image? It's really good! Anyways, perhaps define the eye depth and add shading onto the <--- ear pink. 03:23, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

thank uTonypaw (talk) 03:28, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

The eyes look more green than amber. --PyroNacht (talk) 03:33, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

i colorpicked from the star, but i changed it anywaysTonypaw (talk) 03:40, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

You reserved the kit image, not apprentice

whoopsTonypaw (talk) 04:12, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

This looks really great so I'm moving it to 'For Approval'. I didn't see you in the project list, but if you decided to join later, you'd be ranked as an apprentice now.

Thrushtalon (E) ~ For Approval
ik the facial marking placement isn't exact, but it's from the complete opposite side of the cat, so I figure its okay

(I actually had this and his star image finished and I was anxious somebody would post it before me lmao this is why I shouldn't make images while mine are being approved. Anyways, would you mind if I did the star image?) As for the image, define the shading a tad? 11:36, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I wouldn't mind you doing the star - wasn't planning on doing it anyway, I think^^

Bristlekit (Star) ~ For Evaluation
I tried, and I know there's waste by the tail I'll get to it, and this'll probably be the only image i make. I'll also work on the shading. I'm actually extremely proud of this. Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:49, May 2, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Theres waste by the front of the cat, and on the tail, also could you possibly make the pupils smaller and add a pupil in the other eye? Right mow he looks like he has lazy eyes <span style="">19:55, 5/02/2017

Also could you lighten him a bit? I cant make out anything on him besides his eyes and earpink <span style="">19:56, 5/02/2017

Strong Pounce (Ki) ~ For Approval
This pattern was a little difficult but I did it —  Minkclaw   19:45, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth, shading depth, the dark brown ears, and is there color in the nose? <span style="">19:53, 5/02/2017

Define the light on the legs, especially on ---> leg. 20:27, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Max (Ro) (Ro) - For Approval
not sure if I had to add the collar 20:44 Tue May 2 2017

For the patches on the back, i had it actually kind of heart shaped, and the dots above that were meant to be teardrops, symbolizing angel wings cus he died ;; and the "mask" on his face does actually go over his eyes, as its supposed to be a mask :p <span style="">20:50, 5/02/2017

Reuploaded does that work a little better? 20:56 Tue May 2 2017

Yes but you forgot the teardrops lol :p <span style="">20:58, 5/02/2017