Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
I'll take away the pale chest if needed. Redone for triangly stripes. I guess we aren't listing OA's anymore soo. Comments? 21:54, 04 17, 2012

I thought Sky still had claim to this. 22:18 Tue Apr 17

-sigh- If she does, I don't know. It wasn't reserved for her. I thought she was taking a break anyways? I could withdraw it. 22:22, 04 17, 2012

Ha, I was planning to do it when I came back, but I'm not all that bothered. Have it if you want it. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Also, add a stripe running down the back, just like the tail has one, and (if you want), can you move the first part of the stripe under the chin up, an connect it to the eye? 23:37, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

When was she described as this? (just asking) And if you want her to have a paler chest, extend it at a top more. 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait, never mind. xD  15:26, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:31, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make this a lot brighter- she was described as pale gray. XD 02:49, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added stripe, defined shading, lightened it...and I'll fix the chest and earpink now. 10:09, 04 18, 2012

Make the stripe going down her back look less like shading. 18:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs to be much paler  18:17, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:48, 04 18, 2012

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 22:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes curve with the body more. 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the right front leg not have any stripes on it...? 10:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes a bit? 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly and lower the opacity on it a bit. 11:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redone...not much to say. :3 Comments? 15:20, 04 22, 2012

This is just an opinion, but even thought we've approved images with this kind of tabby style, it looks more like mottled fur effects to me. Though, it might help if the stripes all didn't point in the direction of her tail  15:34, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 19:15, 04 22, 2012

blur the shading on her back and neck -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:51, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her since was described as a pale gray tabby? 19:55 Sun Apr 22

Re-uploaded. 21:15, 04 22, 2012

Define the shading a bit and blur it. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  01:30, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the gray more, and there's waste in the triangle between her hindleg and front leg, on the herbs, and on her chest. Also, can you make the stripes curve with her body a bit more, and make the zigzag down the middle less triangular? 05:09, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't change the stripes without remaking them...but I can try. :3 Also, I see the waste by the ears and tail. I'll clear it in the next reupload. 23:56, 04 26, 2012

Make the earpink bigger. There's waste at the feet and back too. 03:55 Fri Apr 27

darken the shading -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:49, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste 03:58, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing, I believe. 23:31, 04 28, 2012

If the changes are showing, clear the waste in the triangle between the legs... 23:46, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. This is beautiful, Mooneh! 00:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. 20:20 Sun Apr 29

Lionblaze (Alt. A) ~ Redone
Well, I thought...while he has this alt. The pale belly's a preference, I can remove it if you want. :3 Comments? 22:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:12, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

His ear should be torn. 21:57, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  23:00, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate it so it's more orange and less golden. 23:22, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:05, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste in the nick ear, and it might just be me, but the shading seems ti be the same color as the stripes. I suggest using a darker shade of that color (if it is colored) or putting the stripes under the shading layer. 05:14, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I redid that redo. 13:27, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and define the tail shading.Skt Knock knock  13:44, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Is he supposed to have white markings? 21:02, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Misty, I put it there because I like it, but if you want, I can make it more opaque or just thoroughly delete it. 22:12, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pale markings aren't the same as white. Please change it..

Funny, it looks like light ginger on my laptop. 09:21, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, it's white. 20:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:04, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back and haunch shading. Skt Knock knock  22:10, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the face shading. 22:29, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:14, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Patchpelt (A) - Redone
Here's his apprentice. Redone to match his warrior. Leggy made me give him a purple nose. I'll fix it in the next upload. Thanks to everybody who watched. <3 Comments? Breeze whisker  02:58, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

But I like the purple nose...;.; Blur the shading on the face and front leg/shoulder a tad. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 03:35, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. No purple nose. Breeze whisker  03:22, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Fix the earpink coloring. It looks white. 00:09, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

The inside of the ear with cats with black ears usually looked white. See? I color picked it off the warrior, anyway, so if it was fine this is. Breeze whisker  02:26, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be dark brown. File changes may not be showing yet. Comments? 05:29, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink less red? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  11:10, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

And make the earpink a bit more triangular. 12:29, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneh, you still working on this?

Yes, I am...Sorry about this. I'll reupload tomorrow since I can't right at the moment. 06:46, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ki) - Redone
Redone because the shading and the paw was wrong (that's not why it was redone..x3) -gives thanks to my friend who watched and critiqued- ouo Comments? 21:24, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

-Feels special- lolz x3 I sorta missed the bell adding part, so can you add a highlight/shine to it and move it two or three pixels up a bit? ^~^

Make the white less grey, and define the earpink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt ANZAC day  22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black a bit less pure black and define the earpink ( Maybe... |D ) 00:10, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...maybe make the collar more curved towards the center. 09:23, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I...have a bit of a history with losing files... x3 Yeah....... 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...could I take over? 22:17, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 01:04, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3  03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.) 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. 12:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink and blur them higlights. x3  21:24, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste below the stomach. 21:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tear the ear. 03:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots more. 18:24, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... I'm gonna have a huge quitter moment but a) I hate this image, b) my blur tool won't blur the shading anymore, c) this'll take me much longer then the two week timespan d) I hate this image! So I'm withdrawing this. Anyone who wants this may have it. 23:55, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this. :3 <span style="">02:12, 28, 04, 2012

Make the earpink more red. 00:11, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded -  Meh, this is a fail. And Sunnyfrost, if someone has volenteered to take over an image and they haven't uploaded yet, please don't comment. <span style="">02:07, 29, 04, 2012

Blur the mid-shading a bit, and get rid of the white specks on the tail and front paw. 04:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add the torn ear. 00:46 Mon Apr 30

Reuploaded -  -dies- Ew this image. Oh and I'll soon fix that black line from the tail to the haunch. x| <span style="">05:28, 30, 04, 2012

Minnowtail (Alt. Ki) ~ Redone
Shading issues. First and only OA was Mistfire. Changes are probably not showing. 22:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and if needed maybe lighten up the base color a tad? :/ <span style="">06:51, 27, 04, 2012

Define the eye depth. 07:27, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  12:36, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry if the first image looked dark. I had no idea where the base color was on her old image @_@. 23:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 15:34, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink more pink and the nose black/dark gray. 18:09, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The nose looks black, but it's a very dark gray. 22:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It's very very hard to see the earpink on the right ear (our right). Define it some. 00:12, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

She looks more black than dark gray, in my opinion. Lighten her up. 13:58, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uh..she's supposed to be black. This is her alt kit. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  03:44, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Silverstream (Q) ~ Redone
Queens FTW. OA was Sandstar with a redo by Iceheart22. It needed to match the warrior. Comments, questions, concerns...? :3

03:54, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made bright highlights. Yay? Better? 8D? 03:58, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit. =P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  12:35, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reason being redone? Blur the belly shading, and it looks like there's a stripe of shading going down her belly, making it look uneven. Can you fix that? 01:05, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:48, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dat waaaaste. All below the image. 04:03, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:36, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail highlight and there's a lighter strip along the back of her tail onto her leg where the shading is edging away from the lineart. Make sure the shading stays constant there. 10:41, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (D) ~ Redone
Okay I know this was origanally supposed to be a tweak, but in chat Cloudy said that if it was impossible to tweak it could be a redo, not sure if this is what she meant but this is how I did it and if you want me to just tweak it then I will. But the shading needed to be fixed, the scars needed to be redone, and the earpink didn't match. The OA was... Scarletwind I think. 19:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a bit. 20:32, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 00:13, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

And define it. ^^ <span style="">01:07, 29, 04, 2012

Define the shading. 13:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Briarlight (Ki) - Redone
Changes aren't showing. Needed to match other images (took colors from warrior). Last OA was Silver. Comments? 21:21, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? <span style="">02:06, 28, 04, 2012

Nope, same color as the warrior. 04:17, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink. ^^  18:06, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit? 18:02, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the chest shading is fine. But its your call, Paley. 22:03, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (L) ~ Redone
Redone cause of pattern, shading, etc. Not sure who the OA is, since Desmond renamed it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock 02:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like a Stoneteller with mud. If you were going for a tortoiseshell, could you make the brown stand out more and make it look more like brindle patterns? I always took "brown and black" to mean a brown tabby with black stripes, but that's just me, I think a brown and black tortoiseshell is possible. 03:18, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's this? xD <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  03:35, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the brown just a bit more? 03:39, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded~ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  03:55, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just a preference, but could you add a few variants of the brown color into the mix? Maybe a reddish brown mixed in? Not totally ginger, just reddish brown. 15:49, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think it's fine. I've seen cats with colors just like this, it's perfectly natural, and he was just described s black and brown. Any more colors and he'd really be a tortie then. But I guess it's up to sky. 18:40, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think I'll keep it like this, I like it better than with another colour. C: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  00:14, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (W) ~ Redone
Redone for the same reasons as the leader. OA is Insaneular. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock 03:55, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

I defined the sahding, cause i hated it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock 03:57, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the muzzle. 17:08, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 00:14, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink's fine. 03:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the muzzle shading is fine, but if anyone else wants me to, I'll do it. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  00:06, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it a little. 21:49, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W) - Redone
Original artist was Bramble, and the shading was blotchy. Comments? 20:06, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

blur the chest shading -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  14:07, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:37, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:17, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, please. 22:02, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Ki) ~ Redone
The shading and earpink needed to be redone. I know that the pelt color is darker. I'll fix it in the next upload. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:12, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and is the nose supposed to be dark gray? Can't remember if that goes with gray cats >.<  22:31, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It should be grey regardless, his apprentice has a grey one. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  23:02, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 <span style="">00:51, 29, 04, 2012

Re-Ups^ :S

Define the neck shading a little? 20:17 Sun Apr 29

Leafstar (KP) - Tweaked
I despise how I did the old shading. Just redid that *cough*copiedthelayerfromfrecklewish*cough*. OA was Thistley, then me. Not touching anything other than the shading. Comments? 00:22, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 01:00, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink~ 21:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (D) ~ Redone
Kay, I'm not feeling my best at the moment. Please tell me anything that's off, because I can barely tell for myself right now. I'd save it for later, but that list needs to be gotten through. 03:28, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think there is too little stripes on the haunch and near the chest area, since more are supposed to be overlapping the pale chest markings. 13:38, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a bit more pink? 19:09, April 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Adderfang (W) ~ Redone
OA was Honeyfur, with redos by Frostheart and Scarlet. Shading needed to be defined. And that's all I'm doing.

He doesn't look very mottled, though, and he doesn't match his deputy. If you don't feel comfortable doing it, then I guess I can nominate it again, but since it's already up.... -shrugs- 17:38, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, jeez. I didn't even know it didn't match his deputy. o.o

Oh, please! Redo it! It's hideous! 03:04, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, joy. This is going to be fun. Give me a bit, and I'll //try// to match the deputy...

Reuploaded. Eww. This be ugly.

Lighten it up a bit and add a few mottles here and there. This be good~ 11:00, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Insaneular (I think), and it needed to match. Comments? 20:09, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken out some stripes. <span style="">04:54, 30, 04, 2012

I think it's my browser, but define the earpink some more. 21:47, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded yesterday I forgot to say it yesterday. And the earpink matches the warrior and apprentice, so I won't change it. 01:09, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (W) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows. Redone to match the deputy and elder, I believe. Comments? This matches so bad ;.; Yes I know I forgot the tufted ears...I'll add them later. ene  <span style="">21:11, 04 29, 2012

Nice ^^ Define the neck shading. 21:16 Sun Apr 29

Re-uploaded. Tufted ears. -dies- <span style="">22:44, 04 29, 2012

This still needs to match more. Lessen the black and make the tabby pattern match. :/ <span style="">04:46, 30, 04, 2012

Owlstar (W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to have bigger eyes. Last time I did this I was told to change the earpink so I changed that too. OA was this weirdo. Comments?

You forgot to sign, whoever you are...xD Redden the earpink. 21:46, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not since the last time I did this I was told to make it match the apprentice. 22:46 Mon Apr 30

Lakeshine (W) ~ Redone
*prepares to be killed* Um comments? 00:23 Mon Apr 30

lighten the shading on the tail -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  00:55, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Mounty, Teldy had this reserved. 0.o 00:56, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

-Sigh- My reservation expired a day ago. 01:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded x'S 01:43 Mon Apr 30

Blur on the chest where the gray meets the white (hope you understand that). And lighten the earpink. 21:57, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (A) - Redone
OA was Dawnfeather with a redo by Splook with the new blanks. He looked more mottled/spotted rather then actually black and white and the shading needed to be darkened. I'm rusty on my black and white cats... Comments? 03:07, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the dorsal whiteness (meaning the white on his back)? 03:41, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Also, I found out black cats with white-tipped tails are actually not as common as you'd think. You don't have to get rid of it, but it'd be nice to see the percentage of black cats with white tipped tails to go down to coincide with how commonly it's seen. Wonderful btw <3  21:40, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I kinda want to keep the white tail-tip. 22:50, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (A) - Redone
So I redid his deputy almost two months ago... -hides- OA was Icethroat with a redo by Mounty with the new blanks. 19:20, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit on ---> side. Or at least lighten the shading there. 21:49, April 30, 2012 (UTC)