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Storm (Ro) (Ki) - For Approval
This probably doesn't match well. 19:47, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, shading depth, and smooth the shading a bit.

Reuploaded 20:09, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It might just be me but she looks tinted yellow compared to the other images. 20:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

^^I see the yellow tint too.

Reuploaded I put a shading tint on the image. (if that's what you're talking about) Sorry, I should have said something about that. 21:14, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on her other images seem more... Clustered, for the lack of a better word. If you'd like, I can try and dig up the file for the ES. (Though my attempt at matching her pattern is pretty bad hh)

In between the thick tail stripes should be very thin, hardly noticeable stripes, i think.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better. :) And Fox, you don't have to dig the file out, you probably have so many other files and my computer doesn't load email anyway. 01:51, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the face and chest? Also, do you think you could curve the neck shading rather than having it be sort of a straight line, if that makes sense? 01:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

awww she's so cute (he?) ((: a suggestion is maybe u could extend the stripes to the empty area on the right hand side? cuz there should be stripes on her haunch area. 04:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Gah this is so hard to explain *.* but I feel like the stripes on her other images aren't as... Messy? Like they seem to form a more orderly pattern, if you get me. There also appears to be texture on her other images, so that also needs to be added.

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt. :) Hopefully this is close to what you meant, Fox. :D 00:35, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 23:36, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:45, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and smooth the bit of shading on the flank thing next to the -> arm

Reuploaded 21:55, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading between the front legs. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:59, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:27, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the <- arm and smooth it out a little?

Reuploaded  17:10, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more on the neck and face. 23:50, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:35, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes there 08:52, 7/30/2017

Reuploaded :) 20:16, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear to be a bit softer on the other images, also perhaps define the stripes under the shading? + smooth the shading on the ear

Reuploaded 18:17, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

doesnt she have a pale muzzle too? 21:16, 8/05/2017

Reuploaded It was already there but I defined it. :P 03:25, August 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the earpink a tad 21:09, 8/08/2017

Reuploaded 00:21, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading

Reuploaded Second time using layers! I messed around with some stuff and got this. They're magical. 17:00, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the head shading? 15:42, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:57, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

There appears to be waste above the tail, around the paws, and around the head and ears. I'd also suggest lightening the shading a bit and then adding (or darkening) the depth to make it more of a gradient

Define shading on tail. Smooth out shading everywhere, also. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:02, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the pattern underneath the shading 18:39, 8/16/2017

Still working, Shypaw?

Yes, I'm very sorry for my inactivity. I'll reupload later. 15:29, August 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:51, August 19, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. This looks good! :) 08:26, August 21, 2017 (UTC)

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) - For Approval
Yes, I know the tail shading is horrible. I'll redo it later.

DOesn't she need texture, or does she not because she's a altErmineGlow (talk) 16:01, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

I think that since this is based off the manga, it shouldn't have texture. Although I'm not sure.

Can you recede the shading on the chest, then a little on the haunch? I just feel like it covers a bit too much with this source. I also think the shading needs to be smoothed out in order to add more depth :)

The farther front paw needs to be white, as shown in the manga. 16:38 Fri Aug 4

re-up Nope. Nope nope nope.

The shading it leaking a bit on the haunch and on the closest back leg. 17:48, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading to give it more of a gradient-style look. Unless you're going for a smudged look? Which in that case, you should probably have smudged all of the shading, not just the edges. It cuts off a bit too abruptly and then changes to an all block-y look.

Define shading depth? 23:25, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Uh, Skye I'm not quite following? Sorry if I sound like an idiot but I'm not understanding what you want me to do.

i think she wants you to smooth the shading Star 02:04, 8/05/2017

I know that, but I'm going for that smudged look, and smudged shading is really hard for me. Like what does it mean to smudge all the shading?

I'm sorry, that was phrased badly and I was tired as hell earlier. Smudging all the shading means not just the edges. With this image, there's the edges of the shading, and then where it abruptly changes to what seems to be a solid darker gray coloring. You see on this file of mine? Like how it's smudged throughout the entire shading layer, instead of just the edges? I mean try something like that.

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define the shading depth 17:33, 8/05/2017

also, define the earpink better 21:17, 8/05/2017

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Could you define the shading depth on the tail? 19:22, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe smudge the belly shading? Just that really dark bit near the front leg?

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maybe fix the tail shading, as it appears to be very blotchy 19:59, 8/07/2017

Okay but, the tail on this blank is so small and shading it right is difficult so imo it looks just fine but if someone else agrees with broken then ignore this lmao

I think the tail shading's all right, but the shading on the chest and haunch could be smoothed out a little more. 00:48, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

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Define shading on back legs. Also, maybe make the darker shade of the shading blend in more with the lighter shading. (If you know what I mean?) I see two different shades, or that could just be me, lol. Also smooth out the shading on the hind leg closest to us. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:55, August 11, 2017 (UTC)

re-up That's the shading depth, Cosmo. (smudged shading is difficult)

Could you smooth the shading on the haunch? Compared to the rest of the shading, it kind of cuts off abruptly rather than blending. 15:35, August 13, 2017 (UTC)

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The areas in red have shading leaking onto them, and I think the shading in green could be smoothed a bit more

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Can you smooth out the overall shading a little more? 20:55, August 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up this shading is killing me

Maybe add some shading on the head, in between the ears, it looks kinda flat there compared to the rest of the image. Good job on the shading btw! 19:19, August 18, 2017 (UTC)

re-up thanks!

CBA?

Sorry, but the shading can stand to be smoothed out (particularly on the neck)

I just wanted to say that the entire point of this shading is that it isn't smooth,, imo it looks okay.

Could you add a tiiiny bit more shading to the hindleg closest to us? :) 08:29, August 21, 2017 (UTC)

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Slash (Alt. Leader) - CBA
for being called gray in path of stars, which is when im almost positive he was leader of his group. <span style="">20:53, 8/11/2017

I'm almost positive you need to reserve things first... <span style="">20:59, 8/11/2017

yep, i forgot to, but i fixed it <span style="">21:02, 8/11/2017

Can you lighten the shading everywhere?

re-uploaded <span style="">21:24, 8/11/2017

I think there's some waste on ---> side of the body, just above the three clawed scar. 17:24, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have missing whiskers? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 18:14, August 12, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. <span style="">20:02, 8/12/2017

Smooth out the shading a lot more. It seems pretty rough and cuts off abruptly, when it should be more of a gradient. Lighten it a few ticks, while you're at it.

re-uploaded. terrible attempt at ibis shading <span style="">02:39, 8/14/2017

Where'd the scars go?

re-uploaded. oh yeah. <span style="">02:51, 8/14/2017

Maybe lighten the shading a little bit more? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:03, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. was at 100% for the layer thingy, now its at 93% <span style="">00:22, 8/16/2017

I still think it could be lightened more. I'm hardly seeing any difference at all.

re-uploaded. didnt want to lighten it too much because then someone might tell me to define the shading depth. <span style="">18:49, 8/19/2017

Nah, I don't think so. CBA?

Honey Pelt (Alt. W) - For Approval
07:20, August 14, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define shading on the back legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:01, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :) 05:41, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

im confused as to where your light source is coming from, honestly. from what i gathered, its coning from --> but then, why would there be any light on the back leg and front leg furthest from us? <span style="">21:41, 8/16/2017

broken this light source is 100% valid and has been used on many previous chararts. <span style="">00:54, 8/17/2017

Yeah... I kinda wanted to have a little bit of light on each leg and I hope that's okay. I won't change it. I didn't think it mattered and thought it was acceptable, as it's on other chararts, like Lyokion mentioned. :) 01:09, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the hind leg closest to us a lil? 19:25, August 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:47, August 19, 2017 (UTC)

You mind smoothing out the shading a bit more, overall?

Reuploaded :) 02:01, August 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the neck? 13:20, August 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded The depth was making it look very sharp. 20:01, August 20, 2017 (UTC)

Bone (D) - CBA
I assume that he is supposed to have a deputy image since he is in the deputies category and has a name box for deputy. Just decline if I'm wrong. Anyways, this was really hard to do. :'> 23:08, August 16, 2017 (UTC)

we dont make assumptions here Pepper =/ as far as i remember, he isnt supposed to have a deputy image. someone correct me if im wrong though. <span style="">00:05, 8/17/2017

can u darken the black a lil? <span style="">00:53, 8/17/2017

You need to stop acting so hostile towards Pepper, Broken. A check of the article would show that, in fact, Bone does have a deputy cite, and it is valid. If we gave Scourge a leader image, then I would think that the same would apply to Bone, because he was acting as Scourge's second in command. Pepper saw a cite, didn't see an image, and made one. That's not an assumption.

Reups 01:06, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

sorry, pepper. i think you missed some of the scars on the chest <span style="">01:22, 8/17/2017

Reups Thank you for apologizing. 01:26, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

I changed it to a blue tint and smudged shading. I definitely like it more than the one before. 16:37, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading?

Reups 17:04, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

The teeth on the collar look kinda?? idk?? blocky, I guess. Second opinions are very welcome on that

I guess you could try to elongate the teeth a little bit and curve them. Kinda like this dude's teeth.

Could be just my eyes, but is the black leaking on the tail? And could you smooth out the shading on the back leg closest to us? Especially near the haunch where it appears a bit abrupt. 20:13, August 18, 2017 (UTC)

the scars on the chest are very blocky, so maybe thicken or soften them <span style="">09:09, 8/19/2017

Define the ear pink? Or at least the light in the ears? I'm having trouble making that out from the base pelt. I also feel like the black should go down just a few more pixels towards his belly. Regardless of what you do, this is still awesome.

Thank you Jayce! But I have to say that I can't update this right now. My mom took my computer away, and she hid it till school starts, which is the 28th for me. I hope I can keep this charart till then? Sorry for the inconvenience. :( 12:43, August 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Got my computer back while my mom was doing errands :) 17:42, August 20, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Oatwhisker (WC) (Star) - For Approval
He looks so much better this time lol <span style="">16:12 Thu Aug 17

Can you define and/or darken the shading?

Reuploaded His pattern makes shading so irritating lol. It ends up too light or too dark. Although I'm very happy with the hand drawn shading. <span style="">16:31 Thu Aug 17

Idk honestly the drawn in toe lines are kinda unnecessary since theres already toe lines within the lineart. <span style="">19:25, 8/17/2017

there's no rule against it and it's not an actual lineart edit. 19:28, August 17, 2017 (UTC)

...There would be shading between the toes. They aren't flat 2 dimensial objects. Shading is supposed to highlight that point. I've done a lot of images like this and others do too... <span style="">19:55 Thu Aug 17

I didnt say remove them i just voiced my opinion is all. <span style="">20:19, 8/17/2017

The stripes seem more smudged out on the elder, this shading looks really detailed, nice job!

Many images have that style of shading, Winter. I've seen even a few just recently approved. It's a style of shading, and it's perfectly acceptable. I see no reason to say it's unnecessary, and some would even consider that offensive. (anyone remember the stink over smudging shading being "childish"? I sure do)

Is the nose filled in?

yep, it is. just with a very pale pink <span style="">04:02, 8/20/2017

can you define the shading a little bit more? I;m having trouble seeing it in some places. 20:03, August 20, 2017 (UTC)

define the eye depth in <--- eye <span style="">22:45, 8/20/2017

Sasha (W) - For Approval
pls do not comment on the shading, I will fix it in a minute.

reups I've never been able to shade this blank I never will be. Also fun fact, I have 3 different shading layers, each with a different tint and source in case I decide I don't like whichever one I'm using. yikes @ me

I think the shading on the hindleg farthest from us should be swapped to the top, if I'm not mistaken... to follow the source. :) 08:29, August 21, 2017 (UTC)

Been wondering when someone was gonna add a cite for her being a warrior. I've been trying to get this to fly for years now. Blur the shading/smooth it out just a bit.