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Brindleclaw (W) ~ Redone
Bleh. My first tortoiseshell. I wasn't sure what colors to use, so I copied them off of Sol, hope thats okay. xD Original artist was Sandstar12, and it needed to be longhaired. I know it looks horrible, so don't waste time telling me that. :P 22:38, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

If you took the colours from sol theres one to many in there, im guessing the dark orange, get rid of it, amd blur the patches some more. 22:46, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, does it matter what colors it is? The definition of tortoiseshell is a cat with 3 or more colors or something, and I think it just looks like more colors because of the shading. I'll blur the patches, but I think its fine with the colors. 22:51, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It just looks reallt busy to me with 4 colours. And smudge the face white some more. 22:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but then, cats can be many different colors. xD Re-Uploaded. 22:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white and the patches a little bit. 23:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, Misty. Can you redden the ear-pink a bit more? Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 00:28, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches. Pretty! 18:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Done. '''Well, it looks too busy with 4 colors, so I redid it with two. 21:54, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and its the second file, or the one with two colors. xD 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a lot like Petaldust! (not a bad thing) The flash of white on her chest is a little too pure white, darken it a tad bit. 16:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur the white flash on the chest and blur the tortoiseshell patches. 18:14, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''ITs so hard to put shading on torties! 22:24, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

YOU did this? This is amazing! Blur where the white meets the brown and black on the tail. 02:38, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Yes, I did this. xD 21:56, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the muzzle and chest patches slightly darker, they look sort of, bright and unnatural.Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 22:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thats nice. I already darkenened them a lot. The changes aren't showing, but I'll upload it again. Re-Uploaded. 22:27, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black a bit, at first glance it looks almost pure blac (though I know it's not) and there's some miscolored lineart, I think mostly on the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:05, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Seriously, its impossible to get through 48 hours without a comment. 21:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white parts a tad, and blur the shading on the ginger. 03:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything. 00:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

It may just be my comuter being funny, but it looks like there's miscolor lineart on the eye. Anybody else see it? (my screen's really wacky today, so I can't be sure). ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:59, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wing (KM) Tweaked/Redone
I was originally just going to tweak it, but, then I realized there was A.) almost no shading and B.) the mudstreaks looked drawn on and unnatural. Eh. I like the patches...but... I could do better. (Mud looks bad, I know. xD) 19:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks need to be bigger. They don't look drawn-on anymore, but she wouldn't be able to put such thin mudstreaks on herself. 21:00, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I was going by what was already on her kit mother image. I didn't like the way they came out anyways. I'll re-do them. 21:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Here's another mudstreak thing I tried. Ehh...this looks even worse, I think. Second one down on the file list. 22:01, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

That's actually very good! 22:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading. ;D 22:28, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

If I darken the shading too much, she'll look...odd. Anyways, re-uploaded. =P 23:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Make the Mudstreaks 2- 3 times bigger. and make less of them. Fiercestar Leader of RiverClan 22:09, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 22:50, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Firecestar, which image are you seeing? If it's the one on the page, you're seeing the wrong one. =P 00:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 00:53, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Don't forget to add color the the nose. ;D I'm not completely sure I'm looking at the right one, but on the second image down, the nose isn't colored. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  03:08, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, you're not seeing things... I had a derp moment and forgot about the nose pink. >.> 03:48, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Re-uploaded. 03:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the brown on the paws. 22:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. See here for the most recent one. 18:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

The whole back leg shouldnt be brown. Add some fur. 18:53, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, that whole brown area is her paw. At least, that's how I see it. I thought it looked weird with it only going about half-way. But, whatever. I'll fix it, I guess. >.> 18:57, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Although it may have uploaded twice...my computer spazzed.... 04:24, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

SKYE thats is epic Darken the earpnik (yea, Im lookin' at the right one xP) -- 04:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Why, thank you. I'm quite proud of myself. Re-uploaded. 04:44, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge where the gray meets the white on her fur juuuuust a bit. This is EPIC! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink..redder. 00:03, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing. When you see the one with half of the back foot a gray-ish color, then it'll be the right one. 01:59, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more saturated. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:58, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I like the lighter ear pink... Like this one, actually. Can y'all quit being so picky with the ear pink? I mean, really. All I've really done recently is play around with it, and it's annoying the crap out of me. 08:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine to me, just make it bigger and thicken the mud some. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:27, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think the mud is fine. Have you seen all the comments I've been getting about it? Plus, I can't thicken it without messing up the pattern I already have. Is that okay? 17:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Birchstar (L) - Redone
Redone as longhair, plus (no offence to the original artist) I thought I redo it completely because the stripes looked a little off. Plus, I tried forever to get that little pale spot on the foot to go away, it's always the same way with the leader blank :P Original artist was Spottedwing. 20:51, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is AMAZING! Maybe just darken the stripes ever so slightly and blur the sgading a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Add stripes to the head, smudge the earpink, and blur the tail sahding. 22:37, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

You should upload this to Birchstar (RC).leader.png, and there's a miscoloured toe on her hind leg. 23:25, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:50, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the shading on her belly darker, especially the fur that connects to her belly right beside her hind paw. 21:57, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 22:10, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 04:01, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

And make the nose the same color as the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:36, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

No, the nose can be a darker brown color. White cats tend to have pink noses. 00:01, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading along the back. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 01:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm sure you can guess the changes are in the file history :P  21:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Clawface (W) ~ Tweaked


Orginal artist was Snadstar12. Well, here he is....all I did was add some scars....I tred to make them match is rouge image. Idk if i did or not...but...comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:26, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Please fix the eye? 14:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar near the haunch looks too light at the bottom. 21:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

That is because i can't blur that part without blurring the lineart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just fix it afterwards or read a tutorial 22:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll move the scar over a bit...then I'll upload. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Moved the scar over, blurred the shading, and fixed the eye. What else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I've uploaded over to see if i could ger the changes to show. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-do the shading. 00:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks fine to me, just needs to be blured a bit. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  04:46, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did the shading and the highlights(Well, I brightened them a tad.) And blurred it to the max. Changes should be in the history. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:49, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make it look like the rogue image? ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, could you make the ends of the scars a bit pointier? With rounded ends, they kind of look like brush strokes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:54, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, I'll do it late, 'cause, Gimp isn't opening Clawface for some reason, nor is Pixril, so I'll see if I can work on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Gimp is working now, I'll get right on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-changes aren't showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rippletail (W) - Redone
He needed to be long haired. Originally by Bramble I think. I tried out a new way of doing tabbies on this, and I rather like it. I may just use it more often now. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  17:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Friggin awesome. Darken the tail shading 8P-- 17:42, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

At last, a image that was made Bramble, then tweaked and looks 50 million times more awesome! Do as BlueOrca said. Looks Freaking beast! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:57, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, & add some markings around the eyes -- 18:38, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Haha thanks guys. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:34, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, holy crap! THIS IS AMAZING! I love the markings....beautiful! Can you make the ear pink a pixel or two smaller though? *admits defeat* Damn. This is so much better then any of mine.... 07:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Psshhhhh, yeah right, like mine will ever be even CLOSE to as good as any of yours. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:39, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

As everyone else said, this is amazing. Blur the tail shading and it looks ready to me! ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred it as much as I could. And thank you. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (Q)~ Redone
Original artist was Sandstar12 and it needed to be long haired. I could not do a good tabby pattern to save my life, and i might just end up redoing the stripes. Comments? 20:26, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Add some of those small stripes in between the big ones on her hind foot. It looks out of place with the big gaps. And nonsense, I think you can do tabby markings just fine! 20:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy. Iceheart, you make excellent tabby patters! xP Curl the ends of the stripes by the eyes up to resemble eyelashes, they make her look kinda strict. xP Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 21:23, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Lol angry Silverstream >:|. 03:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Darken the nose color some so it doesn't blend with the pelt. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Round the tips of the M stripe on her forehead and blur the stripes on her belly and the Y stripe on her shoulder. This is beautiful, Iceheart! ;) <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 22:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (L) - Tweaked
It's the second one on the history. Original artist was Bramble. It was agreed numerous times that his crooked jaw needed tweaked. Comments? 20:55, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great, Ivy! ;) Maybe jut his lower right part of his jaw down and open his mouth a bit more. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:25, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added some very dark red to his mouth so it wasn't all solid black. 01:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is totally epic! ;) Maybe add a line to show where his upper jaw is twisted up by his eyes? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is what you had envisioned. By the way, thanks! 16:11, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorta. I meant on the other side, but this works too. When I said draw a line, I kinda meant sharpening his uper jaw, sorta how Ruby and Socks were shown in the manga when they ran into Scourge. I hope that helps. If not, I could show you. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 22:02, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ottersplash (W) - Redone
Original artist was Darkhallows, and she needed to be redone to match her description. 21:08, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, beautiful, Rainey! Blur the shading on his chest a bit more and maybe lighten it a tad. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:26, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make it a bit more ginger, it almost looks cream. 03:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous, Rainy. Can you make the line in the nicked ear just a bit thicker though? 07:08, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (W) ~ Redone
Took all the colors from her warrior and apprentice chararts. Redone as a long-hair. Original artist was Bramble and was later tweaked by Goldenpaw and Stealthfire. Comments? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

It won't show me the image, but if I'm seing it right from the thumbnail, darken the tail shading some 21:22, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:31, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the back. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Shadewing/Sig}} 21:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Great job! Add some more stripes. 21:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 01:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the round stripes smaller and add more wiggly stripes? Too many big round stripes look unrealistic. 13:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Re-worked some of the stripes. You all know where to find the changes. xP <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage |undefined 21:58, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) ~ Redone
Original artist was Darkhallows, I didn't know if you wanted me to copy the way he/shhe did it or not. I just copied the idea from the Elder image, so comments? Moo  nstr   ike  22:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this 'Loudbelly.warrior.png' Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:45, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:02, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried to change the name but my image won't appear, Darkhallows will when I try to post it. I blurred the highlights, not to much but tell me if you want more. Moo  nstr   ike  00:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty Moon! -- Toshiro  Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword!  16:20, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (L) - Redone
I just redid it so he could match his other images. I actually really like this one. Took all the colors from the warrior image - original artist was Mumble789. Comments? 23:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are in history. 23:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

The nose color looks odd. Brown against brown. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

So we will be adding black muzzles to all of his images, right? Nice work, by the way. 00:01, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and thanks. Mintstar, well, I couldn't do pink...and neither could I do gray, so I went with brown. Unless you'd prefer green? :) 00:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Why couldn't you do gray? :D <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a scar on his muzzle 01:21, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

And a torn ear. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 01:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, he also needs scars in his pelt too. And pale amber eyes (if I remember right, yours are just amber) This is coming along nice, btw 01:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch/Smudge the black a bit further up his face and on either side too. Can you add a couple more stripes? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, the scars! Stupid me *facepalm* Mint, it looked really...odd against the brown coloring. The brown looks better. 13:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

YOU DID THIS? Woo~ Looks so freaking cool! Blur the black on the muzzle, please.

Tawnypelt (Alt. W) - Redone
This one has been bothering me for awhile. I was the original artist, and it was too ginger. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:58, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Change is in the history. I don't know how I added the one showing. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:01, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Darken the earpink a tad. :3 03:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I forgot to add that I borrowed everything but the eye color from Birchfall's alt. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:20, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much better, Mintstarr. Blur the ear pink a tad though. 21:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudstar (L) - Tweaked
Alright, here's Cloudstar. He needed darker shading, and I changed the earpink beacuse it was purply. Original artist was Sandy. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  15:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 15:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewater (E) - Tweaked
Original artist was Icethroat, and I just darkened the shading. Changes are below the current version as usual. 20:11, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really dark. Lighten it up a lot. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:12, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. 22:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)