Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Fircone (Ro) ~ Redone
Soo I lost the file for this. How the hell did I do the pattern before O_o OA was Rainlegs, Skt (I think?), and a redo by me. Redone because of the tortie vote. 18:11, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file? Some of the colors look a bit too orange/yellow. 19:30, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, please. Although I think some of the problem is the highlights. 20:34, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I think there is a tad more spacing between the markings, but I'm not so sure about that, given that this is facing a different side. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:16, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 11:23, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA’s are Iceheart22 Stoneclaw33 and tweakers are Mount Everest and Ducksplash. Tweaked to remove underbite. 07:50, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lets see... Could you add more light on the main body? I don't know, it just seems really dark. Nice job! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:03, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the light on the main body is fine. 10:04, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I still think it could be defined on the legs a little bit, if not on the main body. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:05, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

???...second...well...another opinion please? 01:47, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:51, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think the light on the legs could be defined- it looks like the entire thing is in shadow.

Reupload Wouldn't hurt to do it anyway. 02:12, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the overall shading a bit? It looks a bit flat to me...but that could be my iPad screen 03:39 Wed Oct 28

Reupload 05:40, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

This might be an unpopular opinion, but I feel like doing a second tweak on shading is a bit too much for an image, and things start to lose their quality by then (unless the person has the file). Personally, I'd advise going back to the original image before the shading tweak (unless that tweak changed more than just shading), and modifying that instead. An image can only take so much shading/marking tweaks before it starts to just get a bit lost. If people aren't cool with this, I'd totally understand, I just think it would be the best option to end up with a good quality image. If you stick with this version, lighten up the shading and maybe add some highlights or something to recover the bits that have just gotten lost in the shading tweaks.

Alright, well I agree the shading needs to be darkened as I forgot to lower the opacity. The rest I'd like a second opinion please. 06:59, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Rain That Passes Quickly (E) (Alt) - Withdrawn
I do understand I may have to blur the shading more. OAs were Iceheart, Sweetflower, and Rowanflight. Tweaked for define shading, and unsaturated scars/earpink 12:21, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, honestly. Also, it's Rowanflight, not Rowanheart.

reups 12:55, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. 16:08, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, please. 20:48 Wed Oct 28

someone else can have this 22:14, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. 22:47 Thu Oct 29

Poppycloud (Q) ~ Tweaked
the OA of the new blank version was Beebs, tweaked to remove white. 16:58, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I can still see a little bit of white on the tail tip 18:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

and i think her belly too? either way theres a weird looking patch. 06:04, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I see some white on >>>> this side of her face, too. Nice job! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:12, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 12:32, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (Q) - Redone
Omg I'm so proud of this. OA was StormSongz :p 22:29, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the patches more please. Nice job! 03:29, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading on the main body? Beautiful. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:13, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

reups this is as far I can stretch the main body shading 22:10, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

The reddish color doesn't quite seem to match. I think it's redder on the warrior. 23:47 Thu Oct 29

I colorpicked from your file. pretty sure its the right color 23:56, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

It's probably just my highlights then. 1:38 Fri Oct 30

Gray Wing (Ro) - Tweaked
Darkened, used the color from Gray Wing's ES and Cloudy gave me permission to tweak the shading. I messed it up I'm sorry 01:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see any shading at all, now... Define and darken it.

Re-uploaded: 00:18, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

define it some more. 10:39, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Brackenpelt (k) ~ Tweaked
oa be me 03:16, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit.

Re-uploaded I tried without the file 01:50, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

same as the warrior- can you add some ginger or something to those areas, it doesn't look right. 17:43, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 09:15, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA = me. Tweaked for darkness 07:36, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I just realized I misnamed it oops :x 07:36, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Can you upload over the original... 11:25, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading? I love Gray Wing! and that shading! 20:39, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:09, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Kestrelwing (MC. alt) - Tweaked
OA is Wildheart. 11:20, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

The line of shading above his shoulder looks a bit unnatural. Maybe bring the top of the curve closer to the chest, if you know what I mean? Also, you forgot to smooth out the shading on the back legs. 16:04 Thu Oct 29

Re-uploaded 01:52, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Fernshade (Star) ~ Tweaked
Fernshade is bae <3 Tweaked to remove white. OA was me. 17:26, 29, 10, 2015

smudge/blur the pale part on her paws? 23:41 Thu Oct 29

This is completely optional, just a matter of taste, but could you maybe tweak the pale colors hue to lean more towards orange than red, so it looks more cream rather than pink? Like I said, completely optional. Same applies to the other image if you go with it though. omg hi mounty

Re-uploaded Okie I think I got it. omg hi paleh  03:27, 30, 10, 2015

Hue's much better and I like this color, but it seems to have lightened up a bit, and I'm worried someone might mistake ot for white later and tweak it again. Maybe darken it just a couple shades to be on the safe side? If not, that's cool.

Fernshade (A) ~ Tweaked
Same as above. 17:26, 29, 10, 2015

Re-uploaded 03:28, 30, 10, 2015

Dapplepelt (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to remove white. Not sure if this color looks ok but I'm not removing the patches. I think the eyes are also the wrong color (they were changed after I was done with them) so I'll fix that on this and the MC in my next reupload  03:46, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more brown patches elsewhere to make these ones fit in better with the rest of the pattern?

Maybe make the patches black? If you don't want to, that's fine, though. I just think the brown color is a bit jarring. 4:13 Fri Oct 30

Reuploaded  04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the med. 09:13, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hey ivy i have mfv right here and it says dappled pelt is an orange and white tortoiseshell. 12:41, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (MC)- Tweaked
^Same as above  03:47, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the paws 09:12, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be gold. 11:38, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (Ancient) ~ Tweaked
12:14, October 30, 2015 (UTC)