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Dodge (Ro)~ For Approval
My first charart. Comments? If the picture isnt showing, its here. ~Fallen 23:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nice for your first charart. ^^ Blur the body shading a bit and slightly define the stripes. 11:22, 11, 04, 2012

Define the stripes they are hard to see 12:18, April 11,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stripes defined and shading blurred more. Thanks, DJ :3 --~Fallen 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This is pretty for a first. Define the earpink at the tips? 22:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image has a yellow-green hue. Fix that? 23:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look yellow-green to me ._. 15:41 Thu Apr 12

I think it just looks yellow... Tone down the highlights(?) a bit. 00:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ear pink. I did`nt use any layers, so I darkened the main color. --~Fallen 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 01:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading, since I didnt have highlights, and blurred earpink a bit more. --~Fallen 03:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose a little bit. It looks a little neon to me :P 17:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think if you darken or make the base color less yellowish, this could be just about 80% done, in my opinion. 03:18, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Well, I don't know much about this but it's been over a week since Fallen's last upload, so I decided to take over. Comments? 04:48, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

According to my clock, it hasn't been over a week...A few more hours. 05:01, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wiki time for me is 5:02 05:07, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's been over a week, so this can stay. Lighten the earpink a bit to make it look less hot pinkish, there's waste under his belly, and I see a slash on his chest and his front leg farthest away from us, is that supposed to be there? And tone down the highlights a tad. 15:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think that slash thing maybe part of the stripes. Can you define the shading a little more? 15:53 Sat Apr 21

There is some waste in between the back left thigh and the under belly, Looks great! :3 -- 20:36, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the striping pattern. I might need to blur it some though :/ 15:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please do. They're too sharp-edged, imho.

Define the shading ;3 20:06, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a lot. And it looks like they're on top of the highlights. Darken and define the shading as well. 19:00, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. If you're using layers I would suggest putting the shading layer on top of the stripes layer. o3o 20:21, 23, 04, 2012  20:21, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know there's a lot of waste Dx please cdoment on something other than that, and I know the eyes and ears are missing too... I'll reupload soon this afternoon. 13:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's supposed to be named like Dodge.rogue.png So, basically, get rid of the extra .png =3 13:34, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but those don't look like stripes....try looking at the tutorials for stripe ideas.

Tons of waste around the art. Color in the eye and the nose. Add earpink. 00:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I know there is waste, and I specifically asked if you would not comment on that since I stated I already knew about it and would be cleaning it up. 03:59, April 25, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded That's better. I'll get the earpink and waste later 12:55, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's white specks on the tail, and the whole thing looks a little green. 16:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

define the earpink c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:05, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but after discussing with another SM, we've agreed that this isn't 80% complete. You have a week to get this 80% done or it will be declined. Also, there's waste around the image, blurred lineart, and the stripes are triangle tabby stripes. Please fix that. 00:38, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the shading some. 00:21, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? 05:20, 30, 04, 2012

Yes 05:25, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reupload it then. 12:29, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Been practicing "Mountain tabbies" on my parents' computer, so hopefully this'll at least look decent. I looked at a picture of a real cat when I made this. 14:53, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks mottled, please fix that. And I can't quite tell through the "mottles" but it doesn't look that much like a tabby right now.... it may after you get rid of them, I don't know. 15:02, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll change it if someone agrees with you, because it doesn't really look like mottles to me. 19:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't, per se, but I think it's the grey underneath. He's just a brown tabby, so let's keep him that way, 'kay? There's also waste all around. 19:34, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks gray cause of the highlights. I'll fix it c: 19:46, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the stripes look like lines, and a bit mottled, I agree with Paleh. Please fix that. 00:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit too. 11:16, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry; 'reuploaded trying a new pattern since the last one didn't look much like stripes... I'll revert if you disagree but I think this one's better. 12:59, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

waste around the image c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  13:11, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 19:52, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Evil waste around the image. Kill it? 21:52, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Gr. Vile, vile waste. Killed it... I hopes. reuploaded 22:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's still some waste. Much better Ivy. :D 06:03, 05, 05, 2012

Still looks mottled... 08:30, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks DJ! :) 12:40, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. 13:08, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

define the stripes near the tailtip. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  15:25, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:49, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste all around. 15:51, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

It's still really dark. Try lightening the base coat. 23:45 Sun May 6

There's smears of light brown everywhere on the base pelt. 08:01, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm having trouble telling the stripes apart. They look mottled. Please, change it. >.>

Define the highlights.-- Spottedstar42 The WWi ki van dals Mu st fall!!!   05:54, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Reuploaded 19:09, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

There still waste. If your on GIMP, I suggest using the wand tool or setting that layer to "Multiply" or "Burn" so there isn't waste. 16:07, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Change the stripes, please. They look mottled, rather than tabby-like, and get rid of the lighter brown smudges. Dodge is a dark brown tabby. 04:25, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

The light brown smudges are okay - most cats actually do have that, regardless of their pelt shade - but those mottles have to go. 19:15, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

The brown paws is going over the lineart, put the lineart layer above the lighter paws. (The front paws) 09:10, 15, 05, 2012

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Boulder (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Boulder was shown as a solid light gray tom on pg. 76 of The Rise of Scourge. Comments for improvement? 13:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink and enlarge the earpink as well. Also rename this  13:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploded Also, why don't you rename it. I don't know how. 13:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Because she's not an admin. It's not that difficult. Go into whatever program you use, choose "Save AS", and name it "Boulder.warrior.alt.png" and when you upload it to the Wiki, it will be named that. 13:50, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Sort of) just renamed the file with a new image. 13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. 14:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smooth it out so it's not so blotchy. 18:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes might not be showing. 19:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink more. 20:21, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. 02:21, 21, 04, 2012

Also blur the earpink. 20:55, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. It might be just me, but it looks like they're rectangle-y. Spark Love me some chocolate~! ♥ 22:02, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really hate blurring. 16:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. 20:23, 23, 04, 2012 20:23, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading? c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:53, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still really hate blurring. 19:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

You may not like blurring, but blur the shading more. :3 00:33, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 02:36, 25, 04, 2012

Reuploaded I can't blur the shading or highlights anymore. 18:12, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks a little blotchy. Blur it more if you can, or redo it. 20:46, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a little as well. 07:46, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink more. 08:19, 26, 04, 2012

Reuploaded 17:20, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:06, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it bigger.-- 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the shading, its really hard to see. 23:58, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 16:55, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Center, enlarge and make the earpink more triangular. Define the haunch highlight, and there is some waste between the legs. 19:24, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, make it more triangular, and make it more pink instead of dark purple. 21:51, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. 16:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the face "highlight" 20:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the highlights. 10:08, 02, 05, 2012


 * And blur the earpink's edges. 10:12, 02, 05, 2012

Center the earpink a bit more too. 00:48, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the haunch and stomach highlights.

Reuploaded 14:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Again. Forgot to center earpink and the head highlight seemed too light. 15:08, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define it.
 * What I mean is make the shading easier to see, like by darkening it, but blur the edges of it so it's not so blotchy.

Hmm, Just a suggestion, but how I make shading easier, I make a new layer, I use paintbrush or pencil, I draw the shading in pure white and full opacity and then blur it, and then set the layers opacity to whatever level looks best, and it makes it easier to work with. -- 23:19, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  13:09, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't want to seem rude or anything, but this has been up for two weeks? Shouldn't this be declined? 19:54, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Silver I think that's only for tweaks..I think original art on the approval page gets a month..I think. And make the highlights bigger, and less blotchy. I suggest the shading placement on the tutorial. 00:42, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, original art gets a month. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  00:46, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

I read it wrong, so I tried to edit it back to me not even posting that at all but it didn't so through. Can you possibly move the earpink so it doesn't look sideways? 13:10, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:16, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:46, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bigger.  Berry Gradients, gradients... 05:52, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a little bit too. 22:53, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading a tad -- jack  never let go, loonie ❤ 23:01, May 7, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded 23:34, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons. 00:30, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink, it looks too sharp-edged.-- Spotz Gray stripe FT W!!!   06:01, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:21, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more. 20:11, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the face shading and blur the rest of the shading to make it less blotchy. 00:21, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular 11:37, May 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Make the earpink smaller. 22:04, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? 22:06, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week since the last upload. If no one minds, I'd like to take this. 00:30, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes here. 01:00, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the mottled effect a tad~ 05:49, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:02, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. A 2) ~ For Approval
Please fix the title if I got it wrong c:. Berrynose, for the times he was said to have a tail as an apprentice. Comments?  Berry Gradients, gradients... 08:13, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and maybe add more depth to it. Great job, Berry~ 08:40, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The changes are here: if they're not showing :3  Berry Gradients, gradients... 09:37, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more, especially on the haunch and front leg. C: Skt Like a baws  12:40, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and add/define the nosepink as well. :3 12:49, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The changes are here: o3o <span style="background-image:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(bottom left 100deg, #000000, #007BFF 20px, #AA00FF 5px, #ccc 10px); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry ♫Your presence still lingers here...♫ 13:14, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Change the nose to match his apprentice. 19:17, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Le changes be here: o3o <span style="background-image:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(bottom left 100deg, #000000, #007BFF 20px, #AA00FF 5px, #ccc 10px); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry ♫Your presence still lingers here...♫ 10:00, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the front haunch (is that right? o.o) "highlight" a little bit. 11:21, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Le changes be here: o3o

If you want perhaps make the shading more pinkish? <span style="">08:39, 16, 05, 2012

Plumwillow (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
I made her long-haired because she was shown has having such in the manga. I'd rather not change the base pelt color, but, I will if you want me to. Here be changes.

Just make the earpink... pinker <3 22:05, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

Purdy 83 Can you define the shading just a tad? 00:53, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's defined enough, honestly.

Can you blur it a bit? 01:29, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

Tangle (Ro) ~ For Approval
Meh. Not really liking that ragged fur. .-. View the changes here if they're not showing already..