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Spotted Fur (Hunter) - Declined
It's been 5,000,000 years. 23:47 Sun Aug 12 2018

And you are just as good as ever. Smooth out the shading on the paws. 23:52, August 12, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth it out a little on the underbelly a little as well, particularly right near the front shoulder? 00:10, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

shading could be smoothed on the tail as well 16:28, 8/16/2018 ​

Still working, Breezey? ​​

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone without a current project may take over, and no permission is required.

Healer Blanks- For Approval
Oh boy, I hoped these are uploaded right Malina457 (talk) 03:50, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Sorry for the stupid question, but do these need to be pixelated? It doesn't look like it, but also, maybe lengthen the short haired tail? Good job! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 03:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make a littttle bid wider in the stomach/flank area? They look a bit skinny atm. Great job though! 04:04, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I can't make them pixalated Malina457 (talk) 04:23, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Eventually, this will need to be pixelated. So before these are CBA'd, we will have to ask one of our users to pixalate them for you. 04:32, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I've removed the |300px from the end of your image code. It's modifying the true size of the image, and on the approval page it needs to appear as it really is, so others can see what they'll be working with (in this case, the modifier was showing an altered size from the original). Please crop both of these as well and shrink them to be the size they'd appeared to be before, but weren't 04:46, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I'll do my best, will upload tomorrow Malina457 (talk) 04:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I can try and make them not so blurry when I'm not aboutt to pass out. I'll have to kinda re-draw them, maybe. Malina457 (talk) 05:44, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Would you like me to redline them for you? 9:42 Mon Aug 13 2018

If you wouldn't mind, I would really appreciate it Malina457 (talk) 13:15, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you make the longhair's tail more bushy? :D  HA WK FI RE98  18:25, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

I edited the longhair, shorthair will be done later Malina457 (talk) 21:36, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reupsedited both Malina457 (talk) 21:45, August 13, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you make the front legs a little longer? I think they would be the same length as the hind legs in that pose. 14:32, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Reups How's that? Malina457 (talk) 15:12, August 14, 2018 (UTC)Malina

These could still be shrunk some, our tallest all hit just under 200, so it could be scaled back a 100 pixels height-wise from where it is now. This is to prevent distortion in the infobox, if it's too large wikia will start to mess with it. Also, there's still a good amount of empty space surrounding these, which should be cropped out. 19:24, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

 Reups: I tried, hope they aren't too blurry Malina457 (talk) 20:20, August 14, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reups tried something with the short fur Malina457 (talk) 01:06, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The longhair looks blurry. 03:37, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

This might just be me, but their torsos look very long. The haunches should try and match the shoulders a bit in height. The long hair's fluff lineart looks a bit thick compared to the shorthair. The back paws are also curved a bit too much when they come down from the haunches, but that might be me nitpicking about style. These look really cute, just need some anatomy touchups imo. ♥ --Echo (Talk) 04:00, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

i will fix these when i can Malina457 (talk) 21:11, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

What do you mean by the torso? Malina457 (talk) 21:44, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I fixed everything else Malina457 (talk) 22:15, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I think Echo means that their bodies look a little too long in the middle (like how a weenie dog is long). I have to agree with her on that, but these blanks are looking really good otherwise.  HA WK FI RE98  04:04, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah I meant their abdomen. Torso isn't really the right term for cats -- my bad! But yeah, other than making their bodies a lil less longer these look great! -- 04:24, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, ok XD (uploading later) Malina457 (talk) 12:17, August 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups Malina457 (talk) 21:41, August 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Are these drawn with the binary tool? The lineart looks very pixely when it should be smooth and flat. 23:56, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

I tried to make them pixelated Malina457 (talk) 01:55, August 19, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups for waste Malina457 (talk) 02:15, August 19, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Let's not worry about pixelating the blanks until the end. Anyways, could you make the belly of the long-haired blank for fluffy? 12:58, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Malina457 (talk) 13:48, August 19, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Crowfrost (Kit) ~ For Approval
this was realy hard to do, well it is only like my third one, so of corse it was hard

Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

This is pretty! I'll only say that you have to remove the background (the white outside the outline / lineart) and remove the "|thumb" part from the image link. Good luck! ◇ Bounce frost spam eats us and we eat spam  03:47, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Done Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

Nice! Define the shading on the white parts.  HA WK FI RE98  13:16, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

You need to upload this as File:Crowfrost.kit.png, and you need to reserve this on the reservation table. ^^ 16:30, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

Correct the blurred lineart on the paws, and I've removed the |left alignment off your image, do try not to readd it because it messed up the page. 16:46, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

the white on the front paws don't go that high, they only stay on the paws. also define the shading, I can't see it. 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​ 18:20, 8/14/2018 ​

Sorry about the shading, Im still new to this, is this good? Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

The lineart is still blurred pretty much all around the image, this needs to be fixed. It has to stay solid black all the way around, with no waste outside such as here where it's leaking over the blurred lines. The eyes for this also need to be green to match the first two images in the set. I'm not sure why the StarClan is mismatched, but the warrior came first so this needs to match that and the star needs that altered. 19:21, August 14, 2018 (UTC)

You'll fix a lot of problems on this image by using layers. It seems like you aren't, hence why everything looks blurred together. Check out the tutorials to see what I mean. I suggest you to create layers for the base color, white, earpink and shading separately. It just makes it so much easier to work with. I'm also wondering which program you're using for this.

Im sorry about not doing layers, the program I use, makes it somewhat hard to do layers, and if I were to do layers, I would need to re-do the whole thing. Should I just do that? because makeing this wasnt that hard, so I can re-do it if you want, and dont answar, Im re-doing it anyways. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

Okay, re-did it with layers. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good (Me talking about cats)

Good! :D Your lineart problem is fixed now. It's good to get into the habit of using layers. Blur/smudge the ear pink a bit and define the shading. Kit blanks are nortoriously for being a bit tricky. 20:15, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

So kits will always be tricky, kits or art, and this is like my first, so why did I do something hard? oh I didnt want to do a hunter, tell me to do something more simple next time please. [https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] (Me talking about cats)

I think your highlight layer or whatever it is may be above the lineart layer? 20:22, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

a bit is an understatement vec I think there might be waste, could just be my eyes though. Brighten up the chest and forehead white. 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​ 21:38, 8/15/2018 ​

Erase some of the shading on the chest to do what ^ Star said.

Make sure to let everyone know that you re-uploaded. ^^ There's waste around the image. 13:08, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

re-uploaded, also, the program Im using has been acting wird, randomly freeezing, and I loose all my progress, sorry if it takes me a while to get it up, I try to re-do it evrey time I see a note in this part, but it still might take me a while. So aigain, sorry. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Brighten up the white, especially on the chest, it looks gray, smooth out the earpink, and smooth out the shading. 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​ 19:20, 8/17/2018 ​

re-uploded, please stop telling me to fix the gray, the only way to fix that now, is re-doing the entire thing aigain, tell me if I should do this. And I dont mind, others have noted it before, so Im telling you, I dont have emotion when making art for others, just tell me what to do, and Ill do it, and no this is not a problem, I do have emotions, so tell me what to do. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

The shading is leaking on the <- leg. Also, could you define the shading on the tail? Keep up the good work, you're doing great. ^^ 20:56, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-done, thanks, Im glad to hear, well, see, Im doing good! Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Hmm, I still can't see the tail shading. Could you try putting your shading layer's (assuming you have one) setting on multiply? It should make the shading appear darker. 00:34, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

smooth out the chest shading, and if you're having trouble brightening the white, then try shading in the white on a different layer. worked for me. 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:53, 8/18/2018 ​

thanks, I didnt think of that, Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, this is the best I can do with the white, and the best for the tail, tell me to re try if if you need, I can try, but I dont want to mess it up. thanks for the suggestions, they realy work! Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Dull down the green/blue in the shading a little? It's looking neon right now. Remove some of the light that's on his face, it's making him almost look a different shade of color. I'm not really seeing much color in his eyes, can you define it?

13:46, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up(aigain), Im as good as asleep, I stayed up till like 3 am, working on this! Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, I re-did it, all of it, I think it is better now. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

this is looking excellent so far. please add some shading to the hind paw and it's leaking away from the lineart on the chest --> that side. 21:24, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

This looks great! I think his eyes are yellow on his other images. Also, maybe extend the white to the chin underneath the mouth? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 21:58, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, And no, Im not tired of doing this, its fun, keep up the requests untel its perfect. And Ravenpaw99, my requests at around the top, it origanaly had yellow eyes, on it. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Idk why my comment got deleted but some green bled outside the eye lineart. The waste pixels in my previous comments are gone tho. ^^ Only things I'd suggest is make sure that the colour doesn't bleed out of the lineart when you blur and the black parts seem to be lacking shading on the body. 22:22, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, Please dont tell me there is waste, because there isnt, I made shure like 10 times. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Smooth out the shading, especially on the hind paw. And the shading seems to be leaking on the front paws. 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​ 23:01, 8/18/2018 ​

Its not leaking, its me failing with shading. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

What program do you use for your chararts? And do you use a mouse or a tablet? 23:41, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth the black on the shading? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 23:41, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Here's a lil guide on shading for this. I tried to match it to what you were doing already. Do your shading with a small pixel brush on a different layer above your flat colouring and gently blur it down so it doesn't bleed through. ^^ Also, there's tiny grey flecks of waste surrounding the image, but it's suuper faint so I might be nitpicky. I've circled them out for you - you should probably change the background to white for a second so you can see them better. I hope this helps !! 23:51, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

I use Photopea and I use the toutch pad on you compeutar, yup, and my brother has 2 mice, (the ones for the compeutar), and wont let me use ethir, and I use Photopea, because I was looking for a program, and I randombly found it. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Try using GIMP ^^ It's a bit easier and from what I know most people here use it along with Paint Tool Sai? The layers and the selection tool will help make things easier and help keep waste from leaking out. 02:49, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

sorry, I cant, Ive tryed, and I cant get eithir of those, so... sorry, my computar is anoying, anything else? Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

This is looking better and better! There's still some [ flecks of waste] about the image and the shading shouldn't over dominate on the white paws. The shading is also a bit too dark on the back paw. Other than that this looks cute! 03:53, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry if this takes longer, I just found the blanket my cat loved sleeping on befor she died. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Re-up, Yes, I know and Im sorry that took longer than 2 seconds, sorry. Im diying of laghfing from that. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Use a smaller brush to blur the shading as it appears to leak a lot on the neck. (suggested: 5 if on GIMP) The shading shouldn't recede from the linear art.

Define the shading on the head? 13:00, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-up, just tell me. I know its terrible. Keep coments comeing, so my art isnt this terible anymore. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

Base color needs to be darker, it has to match the color of his other images. 20:54, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

You're doing better I promise! It takes time. There's a bunch of waste surrounding the image and the lineart has been blurred due to the highlights/shading leaking over into it. 21:22, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Raven Pelt (Hunter) - CBA
This is horrible, and my first time doing texture Malina457 (talk) 19:31, August 14, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the shading a bit? This is amazing!! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 11:06, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

The texture appears too blurred. Try using a small brush? 20:13, August 15, 2018 (UTC)

Reups How's this? Malina457 (talk) 21:41, August 15, 2018 (UTC)Malina

There's some waste by his face. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 05:09, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Did I get it? Malina457 (talk) 21:29, August 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the tail shading. 13:08, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

There's a little bit of waste still floating over the bridge of the nose^ 13:09, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 21:56, August 17, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reups again killed some waste Malina457 (talk) 02:17, August 18, 2018 (UTC)Malina

CBA? ​​​​​​

This might just be me, but they eye gleam seems pretty big. Also the shading on the stomach and into the haunches feels very faint and small ^^ 23:54, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Nah, the eyes are all good and I've seen a few other blanks use styles just like this. ​​​​​

Reups   Malina457 (talk) 02:00, August 19, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Re-CBA? 22:26, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (Hunter) - For Approval
05:03, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit? Malina457 (talk) 12:16, August 16, 2018 (UTC)Malina

can you keep the shadeing consistant? It looks difrent on the neck than the other places. [https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] (Me talking about cats)

I'm gonna provide a second opinion and say that the shading looks fine. Btw, thanks for taking over xD  HA WK FI RE98  18:05, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading a bit. I also think the tail shading needs defining (since I'm not sure the "shading is fine" comment was at everything or just Owlbite's comment)... and could you perhaps blur the tail stripes just a tiny bit? That was the plan with the kit image. ​​​​

Also maybe add some shading to the part of the chest where the legs meet? Malina457 (talk) 00:03, August 17, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Could you define the shading depth? 00:35, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Not sure what you mean by "keep the shading consistent." 07:07, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

I mean to keep it the same, it looked darker on the neck, but it looks like you fixed that, mostly. [https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Define the light on the front leg closest to us?

13:49, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on tail blends in with the stripes. Could you define the shading/make it darker on the tail? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 23:42, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:54, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Dew Petal (Hunter) - CBA
21:48, August 16, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit on the ear furthest from us? 13:13, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:32, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define it on the legs maybe? This looks great! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 19:49, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! 20:29, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading on the main body? 00:35, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hmm that's probably as smooth as I can get it, it doesn't seem to want to budge overly much for some reason. Probably too many layers 00:52, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? ​

Juniper Branch (Hunter) ~ For Approval
I seriously can't tell if her other images have texture.

they don't. on my ones, it's just the shading. 11:18, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

I see, thank you. I know that Beebs usually puts a base layer of texture on her images and I couldn't tell if she did it on this one since the base is really, really dark.

The belly should be that purplish color, unless it's hidden by the shading. 13:14, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

hm mightve forgotten about beebs' rogue (somehow) so I dunno about that, but I think the blackish areas are a bit too dark on here anyway. I suppose if you can't see it unless you squint close up at it it does't matter too much anyway 18:43, August 17, 2018 (UTC)

It might just me, but I think the body should have more grey to match the others, or just more filled in. Owlbite, Im Owlbite okay? Good *Me talking about cats*

This pattern is so cool! I think the amount of gray on her body is fine, but I think her other images have patches that are more sharp/textured than the ones on your charart.  HA WK FI RE98  02:39, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tried doing it with a 1px brush.

Nettle (Hunter) - For Evaluation
It's horrible but oh well I tried. Storm Storm-in-Rain (talk) 04:04, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

don't forget your sig. anyways, add shading, define the texture on the legs and add some eye depth. 01:58, 8/18/2018 ​ 01:58, 8/18/2018 ​

Maybe lighten the earpink? If you look at the previous four images, he has pale pink earpink, not darker pink. Also, it might be just me, but I think there's a little waste on the underside of the tail near the tip and on the belly. --

there are some great tutorials on how to add shading. Nice texture though.

It’s not horrible! Nice effort. There’s waste all around the image, please remove it. 07:32, August 18, 2018 (UTC)

Moss Tail (Hunter) - For Approval
It's terrible. Just wanted to get this up. Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 04:36, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Can you try to match the ear pink to the other ones, and can you make the lineart by the ear black? and can you make the neck shading match the darknes of the rest of the shading. Owl[https://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Owlbite bite, Im Owlbite okay? Good] *Me talking about cats*

Re-uploaded Peacewielder the NightWing 1 (talk) 08:14, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs, belly, and tail? Not bad. :) 13:05, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Not bad at all. The ear pink still needs to be lightened a lot more. It also looks like it's leaking onto the back of his other ear and his head.  HA WK FI RE98  22:02, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Add some light to the eyes? 22:27, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

Thorn (Hunter) ~ For Approval
I hope this is okay? Ravenpaw99 (talk) 23:49, August 19, 2018 (UTC)

This is adorable, maybe smooth the body shading a bit Malina457 (talk) 00:06, August 20, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Re-ups. Thank you! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 01:38, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Holy crap this is so good, define the belly shading and maybe the hind legs too? ahhh I love the texture and the mange and the ripped ears it's just 😩👌 02:29, 8/20/2018 ​

Re-ups. Really, it means a lot. It took me like an hour or two just to get the texture and lineart right! Ravenpaw99 (talk) 02:43, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Spikefur (Unknown) - For Approval
I love what I did with the eyes lmao they're creepy ​

His eyes look cool! Maybe expand the shading on the tail and haunches and maybe add more spikes to his face, facing up if possible? If not, ignore this comment. Ravenpaw99 (talk) 01:39, August 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did add spikes to the top of his head, but I don't really know if I can add more than that, and I expanded the shading (or at least I tried to, I'm not used to these blanks yet.)