Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 67

Floss (Q) - Withdrawn
New lineart, new charart. Colorpicked from her loner image. this was fun c: 22:04 Sat Jul 5

Define the shading and possibly add more white spots on her belly, tail, and legs. 22:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I decided to use pure white because the shading was making it gray. hope this is better 22:11 Sat Jul 5

Re-up. Added highlights, since it might help lighten the belly. They're too bright, though, imo. 22:21 Sat Jul 5

Define the overall shading. Try tinting it, so it doesn't make the white look gray?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:40, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't think you have to tint shading, so I decided not to. 10:11 Sun Jul 6

the white is looking very gray, it almost blends in with the other gray as it is now. I'd suggest lessening the shading a bit,a nd I think a tint might help. 22:23, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. 23:24 Mon Jul 7

I'm not sure, but is there waste around the image? 14:27, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

It looks a little fuzzy around the edges, so either waste or blurred lineart. 21:15, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. i hate waste tbh 23:35 Tue Jul 8

smudge the earpink upwards? 17:02, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

I decided not to smudge the earpink, since I sort of like the earpink as is, and I can't smudge it without not being able to blur it again. 00:19 Fri Jul 11

I agree with rocket, I can't even see that it's smudged. also, the white looks very gray. 00:41, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Smudging ear pink is not mandatory and it is solely a preference. The ear pink is fine as it currently is.

Re-up. Something's being blurred around the lineart. 10:57 Sun Jul 13

Define the shading 19:52, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, and define the light on the tail.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:35, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. 23:57 Sun Jul 13

Add a bit of light on the tail, the shading's a bit flat there, and add some shadow to the face 04:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg closest to us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:49, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on the back leg farthest from us looks a bit flat... Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  15:25, July 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. 14:30 Sat Jul 19

Define the shading/light on the tail? 13:38, 07/21/2014

Withdrawing. Same as below, computer crashed. 15:23 Sun Jul 27

Archiving.

Cinderfur (Star) - Withdrawn
Colorpicked from apprentice image. 'Nuff said. 23:05 Sat Jul 5

Define the light on the tail and I'm having issues seeing the light source. The body says it's coming from the top left, while the forelegs says it's coming from the bottom left. 23:21 Sat Jul 5

Re-up. 00:11 Sun Jul 6

Make the nose color pink. His kit image has a pink nose, and i think his others do aswell.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:42, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i've got to blur that belly shading soon ._. <span style="">10:11 Sun Jul 6

Put some light on the front of those legs, they look a bit flat since they're totally in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten all the shading a tad, too? Except on the tail? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. i love dem eyes   Brick   15:24, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Add/define the tail light 22:40, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Sorry, I had day camp and I had to go home at 5:00, then I had other things. <span style="">23:24 Mon Jul 7

I see some waste near the tail. 14:29, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">23:35 Tue Jul 8

Add some light around the paws? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:53, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">00:19 Fri Jul 11

The shading on the paws are way to dark, and also there is alot of waste near the paws aswell. Maybe changing your light source would help, so that both paws have light on them. The way you have it now makes it look flat.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:37, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. oopsies <span style="">01:02 Sat Jul 12

Re-up. Redid all the shading, since it was really tough to do. <span style="">10:45 Sat Jul 12

Define the paw shading.

Re-up. <span style="">22:33 Sat Jul 12

Define the light on the legs and tail. 19:51, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the ear pink a little more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:34, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. ^^you two keep spamming my chararts lmao <span style="">23:57 Sun Jul 13

Define the light on the tail and maybe add a small highlight to the chest 04:04, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, tbh <span style="">14:30 Sat Jul 19

I'm gonna slide in and agree with Scarlet. The shading does appear rather flat, so I think adding the highlight to the chest-area could possibly help a bit.

I think defining the light on the tail would help too 21:07, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Could you also define the shading/light on the legs? <span style="">03:15, 07/24/2014

Withdrawing. My computer crashed, and I lost all of my hard work. im so sad ;^; <span style="">15:23 Sun Jul 27

Archiving.