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Firestar (W Alt) ~ For Approval
I know i forgot the pale muzzle i get that later. First time i went full out and added deep shading deapth. Damn this is ugly. 21:43, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and get rid of the line of shading on the leg 21:47, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

it may just be my screen but dull down the earpink a tad? better than mine. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 22:06, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Redid the shading completely 22:08, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define neck and facial shading 22:17, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Also define and lighten earpink 22:18, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups  this is as far as i can Blur it. 22:28, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Swap the tail shading around to match with the light source 01:43, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred to match the other images. 03:30, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 16:58, October 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and maybe lighten the shading everywhere except for the haunch area? 22:01, October 17, 2015 (UTC)

This is going to be difficult, but can you define the light on the tail? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:49, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add depth to the shading? 13:49, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (Ki) ~ CBA
Image too tiny for details of ears and stripes. >< please do not tell me to thicken stripes. 23:48, October 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:48, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 20:34, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Erase/lighten some of the shading on the upper part of each leg, and shade the bottom of the paws more? Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:01, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. Very nice! 23:58, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload thanks! :) I seem to find tabbies easier than some reason, especially on kits because I've had too much practice. 05:11, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Add some more depth to the shading and make the points of the stripes. They look really round compared to the sharper/smudged stripes of his other images. 08:55 Mon Oct 19

Reupload 20:58, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 07:28, October 21, 2015 (UTC) the ear tuft on our left is kind of... flying can you just do the same thing you did on the left ear. --Belllastar (talk) 19:49, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine... Continuing CBA. 23:20, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Petal (ES) ~ For approval
<3 09:16, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

there's waste between the two front legs 09:30 Tue Oct 20

Re-uploaded How come i haven't noticed? 10:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the hind leg closest to us. 13:04, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:07, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Fern Leaf (ES) ~ For Approval
09:28, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

the back foot looks a lot smaller than it should be or is it just my eyes playing tricks on me 10:42 Tue Oct 20

reuploaded my bad 10:51, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Clear Sky (ES) ~ For Approval
#screams# CLEAR SKY IS MY BAE

The shading is really dark on the bottom, could you lighten it some? 09:57, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere. 10:12, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Ferncloud has darker shading than this but oh well.

Lighten it a bit more. Please remember that the same shading darkness/style doesn't always work on every blank and pattern. 10:44 Tue Oct 20

re-ups Ferncloud was a lot darker than this. Just sayin

define the earpink on our left 17:50:10 October 20, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the earpink just fine 19:20, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

i agree it should be defined. such a thing as different monitor settings. 20:23, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Looking at the other images, the color is a bit too soft. Maybe sharpen it a little more to match the other images? --Dewsplash (talk) 01:59, October 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:59, October, 21, 2015

re-ups I did the earpink, but I think the color matches. It might be because I used highlights on him, or because of my shading. I tried to match the leader, but realized the leader's texture is different from the ancient and rogue. Should I match those instead?

The leader came first, so all images should match that.

Quiet Rain (ES) - For Approval
Hola. 10:11, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define/darken the tail shading.

Re-uploaded 11:55, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Violet Dawn (ES) ~ For Approval
God Berry's blanks are so beautiful ;; 11:57, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

theres a random streak of grey in the black of her hind paw, and could you maybe remove a tiny bit of the shadow on the front paw closest to us so the black is a bit more visible? 13:06, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

She doesnt have just black paws, she has blsck tipped paws so its fine the way it is. As for the shadow on the front paw, ill get to that when i get home 19:19, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

dude i know >.> all im saying is theres a random hard edged grey line that looks really out of place. christ. 20:02, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups 02:12, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There are random of light gray on her cheek. Add more shadow there? --Dewsplash (talk) 02:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:14, October, 21, 2015

Thats her cheekbone. Its fine 02:25, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Well, could you smooth it out a bit? It seems a bit too...abrupt, for lack of a better word. Also, lighten the shading on the belly a little bit and --> side of her.

reups 23:16, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

whoops reup 23:17, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Slate (ES) ~ For Approval
Probaby my favorite character from DotC. All colors from her other images. Comments? 13:28, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the texture more? It's much more blurred on her other ones 15:18, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:46, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the gradient of her eyes. They look multicoloured instead of amber. 04:33, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:23, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Tom (ES) (ES) ~ For Approval
My hand o.o Did this on and off between classes since about 8 this morning. I cannot believe how many layers of texture this thing needed, and it still looks awful lol. 15:16, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Woahh this is stunning. Could you lighten the shading on the belly a tad bit? 02:29 Wed Oct 21

Gray Wing (ES) - For Approval
I love Gray Wing I love Gray Wing I love Gray Wing. But I literally killed him with this. Thank you to Burnt for reserving this!!! Did I mention that I loved Gray Wing 16:04, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and possibly smudge the earpink more?

Re-uploaded: What even is this 21:23, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

could you darken the shading a little? 02:29 Wed Oct 21

reuploaded 11:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the far back leg? 15:20, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 20:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (ES) ~ For Approval
brb crying -- 16:09, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out/blur/whatever the stripes on her back. so beautiful. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 17:53, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on her head/face (if there is any). this is gorgeous! 20:05, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Did you get the file from me or TFG? If not, it's a good idea too - some of the areas are pale parts, rather than white. 20:46, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed areas of complaint (I hope, anyway). No, I did not get the file from anyone, but I mainly looked at Foxy's Loner and Queen, due to the similar poses. Looking at the legs, face, and tail on the Queen and Kit, they do seem to be a pale yellow. Would you like me to change that? -- 20:58, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

For your reference, the white + pale is at 100% on screen, with color #f9e7c3 for the pale. 21:11, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Oh no I wanted her DX oh well, would you like the file? 23:08, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed white parts to a cream color as needed, and also fiddled some with the shading. Thank you, Beebs!

I think I'm good now, Foxy, and I'm sorry I accidentally stole this from you. :( Thank you for the offer, though! -- 16:38, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Acorn Fur (ES) ~ For Approval
Colors from the kit. 20:50, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading 01:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Is that too light? 02:02, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on all the legs a bit? 19:27, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:24, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Hawk Swoop (ES) ~ For Approval
IT'S THE CIRCLE OF LIIIIFE 21:10, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

AAAND IT MOVES US ALLLLL Can you define the tail shading? 21:19, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up 21:33, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a few ticks, especially on the stomach and --> of the lovely Hawk Swoop. All hail the Queen.

re-up 20:33, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (ES) ~ For Approval
23:54, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups just realized I forgot to smudge a few markings 23:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the markings some more please 00:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a tad? oh dang I want this but this is so beautiful 01:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reups Thanks Fox 09:58, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There should be thinner and a greater amount of stripes. I also think her patches are paler than this. 10:11, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

theyre not paler, theyre duller. 11:43, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

'reups I use highlights, that;'s why the color's brighter. I dulled them down a bit though. 15:35, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Rainswept Flower (ES) - For Approval
yay pretty cat with the pretty name 01:20 Wed Oct 21

That name suits you, Splook ;) Can you define light on the tail (I know it's shorthaired) and I think her stripes can be more smudged (just a little bit) and maybe just slightly thicker?

also make the lighter brown brighter, its a bit dull compared to the other images. 11:44, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Holly (ES) ~ For Approval
I love this mademoiselle. 16:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Oops, a prickle wasn't filled in; I'll take care of that later. 16:05, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups there; I just realized that there's another unfilled pixel on her leg, which I'll fill on the next upload. 16:47, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reed Tail (ES) ~ For Approval
Ezüstkém ^^  I know shading looks bad,i will redo it next upload 20:07, October 21, 2015 (UTC)