Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 109

Willowpelt (Q) ~ Approved
Changes are here if they aren't showing. Comments? 4:36 Sun Nov 17

Could you please smudge the ear pink into the fur a bit more? -- 15:37, November 17, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if someone else agrees with you I'll change it. 16:57 Sun Nov 17

I think it's fine. This image is perfection, hawk...~❤ 06:03 Wed Nov 20

Define your light source; the face and tail make it look like it's coming from this way --> but her body say this way <-- 22:54, November 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Whoops, forgot to say this. I re-uploaded yesterday. 14:51 Thu Nov 21

There's about four white pixels on her right ear, our left. 04:55, November 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I cannot believe I missed that. 17:17 Fri Nov 22

The eyes look a bit off...other than that its awesome.  *Swanflutter*  Warriors is my life~  08:46, November 23, 2013 (UTC)

Eyes are artist's choice, and I think they're fine. 15:00 Sat Nov 23

I say lets go with a CBA. 00:09, November 24, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.

Leafstar (Q) - Approved
And so it starts. Here we go. All colors are the same as her kittypet, so I'm not changing them. If changes aren't showing Comments?

Define your shading a bit? She's cute! 23:59, November 8, 2013 (UTC)

Can you make him  her cream under his  her belly? I looked at his  her other images and they have cream underbellies. 19:25, November 10, 2013 (UTC)

Leafstar is female.... Also, maybe slightly define the ear pink? Like, on the other images I can see it just fine, but on this one, I can't. Unless it's just because of the size of the ears?

Sorry. I get the Leaves mixed up. 20:20, November 10, 2013 (UTC)

There is cream on the belly, but it's in a shaded area so it's a bit harder to see. I think the earpink's fine personally, I can see it fine and it's the same color as the other images. But I will work on the shading as soon as my computer stops being an ass and lets me into PS.

Could you add more depth to the eyes? They're looking kind of...too good. 01:52, November 11, 2013 (UTC)

What do you mean, too good? I think they're fine, imo o3o 01:53, November 11, 2013 (UTC)

I meant that they look very shiny and dark, looks like she's almost crying, lol. But I guess you could keep them. 02:30, November 11, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Beebs. 2:35 Mon Nov 11

Reuploaded

(I might have to redo her if the nomination passes)

Since it passed, could you make this image match her redone leader (since you did make the pattern)? o3o 23:28, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

Yup. I'm working on it.

Reuploaded Sorry for the delay, those blasted belly stripes gave me a hard time.

Add a touch more shading to the back? 23:03, November 20, 2013 (UTC)

There wouldn't be any shading there though. 0.o The light's coming from around the top back left, her back would be in the light.

No comments for a couple days, lets go for CBA? -- 20:17 Sat Nov 23

Approved.

Yellowfang (Q) - Approved
I used the lines from Maple and Bright, so comments? -- 19:56 Wed Nov 13

I think the shading or the base is making her look darker than her other images. Not sure which it is... If you don't mind, could you slightly lighten one or the other? If you'd rather not, that's fine with me.

Re-uploaded -- 20:04 Wed Nov 13

Define your eye depth? 22:36, November 13, 2013 (UTC)

She needs her ears torn up like her warrior 00:58, November 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, I personally think the eye depth is fine. -- 07:13 Thu Nov 14

I think the shading on the belly could use a little bit more blurring. 12:03, November 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think the belly shading is fine. 0:23 Sat Nov 16

It's fine imho. -- 20:21 Sun Nov 17

Meh I agree with Dazzle. Tis great though~ 07:43 Tue Nov 19

Re-uploaded, how's this? -- 07:33 Wed Nov 20

Maybe add a little shading behind the upraised clumps of fur? Tis is optional but it'd look rather cool. 03:27, November 21, 2013 (UTC)

re-up -- <span style="">05:52 Thu Nov 21

Comments? -- <span style="">20:16 Sat Nov 23

CBA? Wonderfully done, Bloo 00:07, November 24, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.

Flowerstar (Star) ~ Approved
I'm really happy with this wow <span style="">11:27 Fri Nov 15

Excellent work, Berry! Maybe make the ginger patches a bit darker, they seem a bit light compared to the other images. HeadmasterGriffin (talk) 16:43, November 15, 2013 (UTC)

Wait, Bert, I thought we were supposed to have only one original image at a time? I thought we could only have 1 new queen and 1 redone queen, 2 redone queens, or one new image, and 1 redone queen. o3o 19:13, November 15, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, since Sandstorm got withdrawn, could you blur the patches and the shading a bit, to match the look of the other images? 23:27, November 15, 2013 (UTC)

Personally I'd like to keep the patches as they are now. That aren't that blurred on the leader either. Also why does shading style have to match the other images? It's /shading/. i might've missed something just let me know if i did <span style="">05:34 Mon Nov 18

The ginger patches do look a bit lighter than the other images, though, could you maybe darken them a tad? ouo 19:26, November 18, 2013 (UTC)


 * No, I agree, I think patches should be blurred a bit more as well as darkened? This is the shazzzz berry you're such a pro. <span style="">07:41 Tue Nov 19

I think the patches are fine darkness-wise. If you do chose to blur them, Berry, you shouldn't need to blur them very much, if at all, honestly.

Smudge the pelt into the earpink closest to us a bit more or define a bit of light in the ear, it looks kinda flat 02:18, November 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">13:49 Fri Nov 22

CBA? 00:08, November 24, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.