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Mousefang (W) - Redone
Shading fail. Anyways, Here's Mousefang. I redid the shading, but I don't think I like the pattern. Might choose another pattern for this one. Anyways, comments? 05:18, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Oh! And I believe the original artist was Shaf Girl :) 05:20, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

All I can say is define the shading alittle and make the earpink fill in the ear correctly--

The eye is misshapen, blur shading on the chest, thicken shading on the haunch a tad, make the earpink proper, and I'm pretty sure you're supposed to shade/highlight the tail the other way.-Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 06:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)<

Plus, the erpink looks a little missapen at the bottom, and the chest shading needs to go on the chin as well. The eye color is too neon. 14:02, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur teh shading on the chest. 16:49, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could, darkened eye, fixed eye, darkened earpink, lightened shading at some parts, fixed tail shading, added chin shading, fixed anglement of the earpink...and... yeah. xD 17:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more. :P 19:29, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Changes were showing, but not anymore. It stopped showing the changed before those two past comments, but it wouldn't let me edit xD 00:03, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, changes are showing again. Sorry I was at the beach all day, re-comments? 01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy. Would you like me to help as I did with Whitewing, or can you do it? Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:05, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her neck. Looks great otherwise~ Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject. 19:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Mintstar: I'm sorry that you're doing all this for me ^^' You don't have to blur it though, but thanks anyways :D Getting a new computer soon, it will be great starting from scratch.. 19:09, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, just blue the earpink a tad more~ Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject. 20:41, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :D 00:54, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink still looks kinda crooked --

Re-uploaded. 03:21, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading under the ear and the stomach shading where the haunch meets the upper body, close to the back. 03:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 21:53, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:27, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading looks a little too concentrated, if you know what I mean. Maybe it's just me ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 07:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix it. Just letting everyone know that the changes are no longer showing. 16:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, and I don't think blurring it will help. Try redoing it? Mintstar I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 22:48, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on this, just trying to do it all on GIMP. GIMP is new to me so it might take a day or so. It'll be up by tomorrow. Sorry. 17:24, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, Re-uploaded. I know the shading needs to be blurred some, but here is my GIMP version ^^' Never to use Pixlr again...hopefully :3 Thanks to Frostheart who gave me her GIMP tutoiral on Teamviewer...lol. 18:26, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken shading on the haunch. Lovely! Snowdazzle¹²³Lets count numbers! 18:32, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'll fix that little strange line next reupload. Do you think I should darken the legs? :P And thanks Snowdazzle :D 01:20, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, highlights and shading, lighten the higlights and they're are pink blots in the background, I'm not sure if you'd notice it, so I made a picture. Also, shorten the neck shading. ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 11:30, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are fine. I'm proud of you Splashpelt XD, but do redden the earpink, and I know it's hard to find the right color for the ear on these colored cats. Mintstar I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:15, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights with the shading more. 16:02, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Pull the earpink down- so that the bottom most tip of the earpink is a little bit closer to the bottom most tip of the ear itself. Also blur the shading and highlights more. Sorry, forgot to sign above. Salcie 21:04, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the charart (e.g. above the ear, beside the muzzle, under the tail, etc) 14:12, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hate this image so much. Rainwhisper helped me out some because I've worked so hard on the shading xP 15:38, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Bramble. Now, this might sound stupid, but I think the colour is all wrong now. She looks more ginger than sandy brown... might I suggest going back to the original approved version (before previous Tweak Weeks) and editing that one to improve the shading, whilst keeping the gorgeous colour the original image had? Just my two cents. 21:01, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

The image at the top of this section is half-covered in a light, yellowish mist thing. It looks weird, and the yellow mist lightens the lineart to a grayish-yellow in some places.-Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 06:18, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry guys, but I've fiddled with this too much. I can never make it look suitable no matter how much time I put into this. I'm withdrawing this for now, someone else is free to take over. Sorry D: 01:15, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

May I take over? I'm not doing any chararts, currently. 01:15, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

That's fine, Misty. Go right ahead. Redden the ear-pink, define and darken the shading on the the top of the shoulders, and add highlights to the fronts of the forelegs and drag the shading towards the backs, if that makes any sense xP ♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:05, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but I think I'll just re-do it. xD 09:48, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? 18:48, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken, or desaturate the earpink, looks a bit...vivid. Nice work. (hope no one minds me deleting the extra coding) 01:25, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great ^.^ Fix the miscolored lineart on the head and eye :3 Also, move the earpink up some. 01:33, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights 01:47, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Since this is being worked on, the heading should be changed ^^; The earpink is a bit neon as well. 03:28, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Delete the white section left to the haunch and right to the leg closest to us. It isn't transparent. Also, The face highlight is coming into her face, so it is blurring the lineart all around it. May I suggest getting the warrior lineart and deleting the all the white inside it and then copying it over the image? Sorry if that was confusing. Make the earpink smaller and move it further up the ear. ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 10:08, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, I'm redoing the shading again. xD 15:47, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Better now? Remember, this is to redo the shading, so I'm not changing earpink, eyes, etc. :P 15:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, changes still aren't showing. 16:03, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit inconsistent. Like near the shoulder it's darker, but by the haunch it's lighter. Also I think if people say there's something wrong with the eyes, earpink, etc. then you should do it because this is redone and Tweak Week is supposed to make things look better. 17:29, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) - Tweaked(Redone)
Yuck. The mottles look messy to me, and I didn't want to overblur them. I couldn't work with the original image, so I made a new one. He needed mottles and his original artist was Bramble, I believe. Mintstar I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 19:12, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like the mottle closest to his face. XD Make them smaller and smudge them into his pelt to give them a furry texture. Make his spiky fur outside the lineart, if you know what I mean. Erase the lineart and add spikes of fur then close it together? HAWKFIRE98 19:27, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, mottles are supposed to be smaller than that. It's a bunch of little spots of darker and lighter color. Also, I was just about the suggest the spiky fur outside the lineart xD But if you need an example, you could check out Kinkfur's warrior charart. 19:46, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mottles a little, at least. If you're worried about messing up his fur, then add the two details on separate layers to they don't affect eachother. 00:48, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think you need to make the fur look more spiky and sticky-out. Dovey Newbie! 20:17, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I got the lineart from Kinkfur's(credit to who made that.) Mintstar I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 19:42, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should make the base pelt color mottled, and then add darker mottled patches like his description says. Also, why is the tail like a brown-gray color? Make it the same color as his pelt. Oh and blur the mottles a lot. 20:20, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I think this looks more bushy than spiky. Maybe have all of the fur sticking out face the same direction? You may have to do some lineart editing, but it would help. Also, keep the original spikes that were on his sides, otherwise he looks flat. 20:22, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Someone else can work on it, I'm taking over Mistystar. And the spiky fur is fine as it is. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:02, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over ;3 So uh Reuploaded And before you tell me to change it to a .png, I can't because my computer doesn't let me upload .png files :P 15:49, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more mottles. :3 The white face is a bit too dark, so brighten that up. 15:51, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for taking my suggestion. :D I think it looks much better now. 17:38, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Change the file name to Thistleclaw.warrior.png so it replaces the old one. 17:48, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart, I've said this before; I can't make it a .png because my computer won't upload it. 23:29, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

You want me to re-upload it for you under the proper file name? 14:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

I reuploaded it under the .png filename, but the changes aren't showing... They should eventually, because when you upload a different one, the file changes show. So, give it some time to catch up. for crying out loud, this image thing gives me a headache. Anyways, second one down has the right image.>.> 14:12, July 27, 2011 (UTC)


 * Still not working. Sorry, Nightflower. =( 14:39, July 27, 2011 (UTC)


 * I give up. I'll just set it back to the other one. Maybe someone else can get it to work... 15:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle/face part. ;3 -- 16:04, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

He needs White shoulders(Gosh, it may look weird....)

The ear pink is blotchy and it's to light. Maybe darken it? 00:07, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add some fur sticking out towards the bottom of his tail. 02:24, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed Thistleclaw's page so it's showing your work. :3 All I can say it there's a line of gray going through the ear pink that needs to be fixed. 15:26, July 30, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I'm not sure how to do the white shoulders, so can anyone shed some light on how to? x3 23:45, August 1, 2011 (UTC) For the white shoulders, I'd either add in a really pale gray or brighten it with the doge tool. Same with the face. There's a spike on the underside of the tail that looks a bit clumped rather than spiky, could you fix that too so it looks like the others? This is looking good. ♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:00, August 2, 2011 (UTC) It looks like there is one little smudge in the ear, or a gray line. 16:40, August 3, 2011 (UTC) That's the way she does earpink ;3 Looks great Nighty, I would say thicken the spiked lineart on the right side of the tail, towards the tip ;3 20:21, August 5, 2011 (UTC) Looks great. Just brighten the highlights 19:15, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's looking great! I love the smudges near the highlights. 03:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:17, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Bleh, I think I ruined it xD I darkened it to match Rainwhisper's image, but I think I did it a wee bit too much x3 I might revert it and start again later. 00:13, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mothflight (MC) - Redone
Originally by either Icethroat21 or Bramble. The shading needed to be blurred and the earpink needed to be fixed. I ended up just pretty much redoing the whole thing. I wanted to get this, and Pinefur up before Tweak Week was over, but I actually won't be able to work on it at all this week. I'm going camping. So please don't decline this or Pinefur, I'll be back by next monday. Maybe even this saturday. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:31, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good, but maybe you should lightne the shading just a little. 13:55, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, the shading is way too strong. Also, add a light part to the ear furthest away. 02:22, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the area between her haunches and front legs. And the shading is a little darker than it should be. Fawngaze 20:07, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm back! Changes aren't showing yet. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:50, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more on the shoulder and haunch. Maybe add a highlight to the fronts of her forelegs? This is looking good! ♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 14:22, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Technically the 24 hours were finished before you made that comment. And plus I don't have access to the computer with the .xcf file right now (it has a virus). Do I really have to do that? If yes, Ok. I'll find some way to do it with the .png file. ♥ Paleclaw <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">May StarClan be with you ♥ 18:02, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Nevermind, my mom managed to fix my computer! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:38, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her up a bit, right now she's gray rather than white. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 00:51, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - She's almost pure white now. I can't lighten her much more. I'd lighten the shading, but if I do you can't really see it then. So this is probably as light as it will be able to get. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 18:03, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but the bottom of the tail's shading is blotchy, and unblurred. 03:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the tail shading. 16:38, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Russetfur (W) - Redone
Meh, Froon convinced me to get off my lazy butt and do a charart :] This charart was originally supposed to be tweaked, but I was having issues with the shading, so I just redid it :P 02:50, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit more ;3 First Foxleap, and now Russetfur... We think alike cuz' ;D 03:19, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Change the file name to Russetfur.warrior.png so it replaces the old one. 03:21, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, the changes aren't showing xP Oh, and I can't make it a .png because my computer won't let me upload it if it's a .png. 03:58, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

And FYI, the changes don't show when I first put the picture there for me too, but they appear after you publish it. Odd. Lol. 04:19, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think you're meant to say who did the charart before it was tweaked? I believe it was Dawnleaf :D. This is really pretty. Lighten the earpink though and there is a garbage around the top of the tail, a brown pixel I think :3 This is good Nighty! ♔Sunspirit♔<sub style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: sub; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">Back in... uh, yellow? 08:07, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Earpink looks really blotchy; I'll fix it in the next upload. 23:44, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

You should continue the stripes into the face, so it looks more natural instead of just the body and tail. 13:51, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I honestly think that this looks amazing with or without stripes in the face. ;) But I think the ear pink could be blurred a little more; it seems to straight on the bottom edge to me. 21:26, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit. 16:45, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Russetfur (D) - Redone
Russetfur's deputy charart. She needed stripes, so I redid her overall. Original artist was Echomist. Anyways, comments? 01:58, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing...but who knows about these things xD 01:59, July 27, 2011 (UTC) (re-uploaded the image :3)

Darken the shading and make the stripes more like her other image. :3 02:10, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:26, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Changes won't show >.< (Edit: I renamed the file, I got it to show :3) 02:28, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make her look more dark ginger, she looks brown. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 03:16, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mintclaw, I thought the same thing when I first looked at the pic. It's pretty, though. I haven't even figured out how to work with Adobe Illustrator or Adobe Photoshop.

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing, but the changed one is darker all together xD And to who ever signed above, remember to sign with four ~'s and refrain from repeating comments ;3 20:40, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be a little more ginger, because the stripes appear brown. But I could be wrong, after all I'm still an apprentice. 22:47, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ivystripe, it doesn't matter if you were an apprentice or not, you were right xD 01:47, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton. Looks good either way. =) 22:10, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Echomist...oh god, I miss her. Um, blur the shading more as Skye stated, make the stripes more...gingerish xD, and blur the ear pink. 00:29, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

You and Nightflower will have to converse, as the pelt markings don't look the same. One of you guys are gonna have to tweak the stripes. 20:49, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the color all together. I'll talk to Nightflower on skype, we'll both upload our images together, probably on Teamviewer or something. 01:01, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Since my image hasn't had any comments for three days, and Nightflower still has comments to take care of, should she copy my stripe pattern? Sorry if I have to make Nightflower redo her beautiful image, but I haven't had any comments. If Nightflower refuses to redo her's, I'll try to make my pattern exactly like her's. 18:54, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 1em 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Is the stripes on Russetfur (D) the same as Russetfur (W)? 19:16, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

No, that's the thing. Should Nightflower copy my stripes, or me copy hers? My point is written out in my previous comment :P 01:35, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say you should talk it over with her and see what she wants to do. 23:35, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I copied everything from what Nightflower has done. 03:33, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Changes won't show. 03:35, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes. 16:47, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just to let everyone know, the revised version is the second one one on the history. 17:41, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Try re-uploading it again. It worked with me for Raggedstar, Jayfeather, and Mistyfoot. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 02:31, August 9, 2011 (UTC)



Starlingpaw (A) - Tweaked
The original artist was myself. It has been requested that he needs tabby stripes. I've also blended the shading more thoroughly as it wasn't brilliant. 11:49, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading just a little bit more? :3 12:17, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see the tabby stripes, darken them a bit more. 13:43, July 27, 2011 (UTC) Beautiful! Lakewillow 22 16:24, July 27, 2011 (UTC)Lakewillow 22


 * Finally the changes are showing up. Silvereye, I'm not sure I can blur the shading any more withou blurring the stripes, but I'll give it a go. Icestorm, can you see them now that the file has updated, or do they still need to be darker? I'm trying to find a middle ground between having the stripes and making sure they're not too dark as he is a ginger cat rather than a ginger tabby as such. Just let me know. 22:32, July 27, 2011 (UTC) :Yes, I can see him. Good job! You might want to darkent he shading a bit more.  23:30, July 27, 2011 (UTC) ::Reuploaded  07:15, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Add a little shading to the left ear -- 07:22, July 28, 2011 (UTC)


 * The left ear is highlighted due to the direction of the light source coming from the left hand side of the image. There is shading to the right of the image, and highlights along the back and back of the ear. For this reason, the right ear is not highlighted as it would not fall directly into the light, where as the back of the ears would, hence the left ear is highlighted rather than shaded. Hope that makes sense (: 07:33, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on his tail (if possible, since the tail is skinny.) Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 15:33, July 28, 2011 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded 21:33, July 28, 2011 (UTC) :Fix the lineart on his chest.  21:54, July 30, 2011 (UTC)


 * I can't see where it's broken, and quite honestly need to sleep right now as it's nearly midnight. I'll be gone for a week, so if someone would like to fix whichever pixel my tired eyes can't spot, that would be much appreciated. Alternatively, just point it out a little more specifically and I can fix it when I return. Sorry. 22:40, July 30, 2011 (UTC)


 * I checked, and the lineart is fine. Unless you're seeing something I'm not, which may be possible. 05:17, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes a bit, looks great! 16:49, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) - Redone
Original artist was Sandstar12/Goldenpaw. He had to be mottled and given spiky fur- basically he had to match his description. The changes aren't showing yet. 16:08, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is good, but you might want to blur/ smooth out the lines/spikes that you put in the main fur. Salcie 20:19, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your seeing the version that was before the one I made, so if you go to his file page and look at the second image in the image history you'll see what he's supposed to look like. x3 21:08, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the spiked part of the fur on the body (yes, I'm looking at your newest version...nice!) 22:41, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mkay the changes are showing now. ;3 I didn't add spiky fur to his body, only to the lineart. There's mottled on the body though. 23:41, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Give him white shoulders, like it is in his descpitoion. Maple♥pool<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;"><sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 19:13, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 20:45, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

The white shoulder looks weird from a side-view...I think you should remove it, and just put a dab of white on the shoulder. 21:19, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well it is in his desc...but I agree it looks WERID.....Maple♥pool<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;"><sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 21:39, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blend the white a bit more so it looks less shocking? 23:26, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

I agree about just bledning the white in more. I also think you should dark the leg closest to us since he's sitting and therefore keeping it in the shade. Fawngaze 20:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh woops, forgot to say '''Reuploaded. '''I don't think the changes are showing yet though xP. 01:45, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the gray a bit or smooth the transition from gray to white, it looks a bit sharp. Define the ear-pink and brighten it a tad. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 04:00, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''But Scarletwind I don't think the changes were showing when you commented, so I didn't blend it anymore. If you saw the changes though, then just tell me. 18:04, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Inside the white patch on his shoulder, there looks like there's a patch of really saturated white. Can you blur that? It just looks a bit unnatural. Otherwise, this looks beautiful. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 02:57, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 20:04, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think that the transition from the shoulder highlight to the front leg could be smoother. But this looks superb! :) 21:28, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might be talking about the white patch on his shoulder. It's supposed to be like that. :3 01:20, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

It didn't say JUST his shoulders were white right? It'd look more..... realistic I guess if the white was like this. That's just my opinion though, you don't HAVE to make it like that. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:26, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

It looks pretty good like that, but you can keep it this way; darken the tail shading. 16:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (E) - Tweaked
I pray that none of you ever have to add torn ears to elders. Scarletwind was the original artist and I just added torn ears. 15:18, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Good job! I don't see anything wrong with this, really, but I'll wait for more comments before approving this. 15:24, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you thicken the lines on the ears so they're the same depth as the other lines? Unless they're supposed to be a little thinner. 21:02, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

I tried that, but it looked really... Just bad. ._. 00:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste where you edited the ears. 00:37, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make them look a little more natural? Sorry...but they seem...too pointy. *waits to be shot by Moonflight* 15:40, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about it. Elder ears are mean to me anyway. xD 23:31, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploaded. 16:57, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The lineart of the ear in front is a bit hard to see; but just thcken it by about one pixel, and it should be done. ;D 16:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (W) - Tweaked
Added torn ears. Original artist was moi~ ;3 Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 02:28, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

The changes still aren't showing, maybe try to re-upload it again. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 17:03, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

They're showing now :3 Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 17:10, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. Redden the ear-pink and darken the shading. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 17:12, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I have this reserved... and you don't. But you can have it. Just please, reserve things next time. 21:50, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry 3:. I didn't check the reservations table... Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 22:04, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (D)~ Tweaked
Needed black ears. Oringinal artist was Bramble. All i changed/will change is the farthest ear. 15:55, August 1, 2011 (UTC) Shading looks blotchy(Spelling?) Maple♥pool<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;"><sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:54, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

As i stated directly above this, only changing the ear. 16:16, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-upload it again to get the changes to show up. It worked for Brokenstar's. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 17:14, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

You pretty much have to change. It's called constructive criticism. This wasn't just posted to change the ears, you're supposed to change the shading too. If you aren't gonna change anything, why did you even upload it and put it on the talk? 14:16, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Both of his ears need to be black/darker, not one. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 15:11, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Mintclaw. Also, I thought he had black lined ears. Othe than that, it's okay. Moonstream 03:59, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- This is how the rogue charart is, and if i put black around the other ear it just looks like blurred lineart. And the rogue isnt being tweaked, so they need to match. 16:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Then the rogue needs to be tweaked next time, because the description says both ears are darker. I was able to make it look natural (leader image) so it's not too hard. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 17:05, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

To me, the ear looks pure black and I can't see the lineart, but then again I have difficulty with black cats in the first place, so if you can see it then I'm sorry and disregard my comment. 03:34, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look like lineart to me. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:40, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

On the thing, it says 'Blackstar's deputy image needs black EARS' so can you mae the other ear black? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:54, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

What did it say in the books? If it did say ears, then make both ears black. 17:45, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Looks bad now. And now we have even more work with another blank to change. I liked it way more the way it was before. 19:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Look. Because of the pickiness of our users, there's never going to be a time when there won't be an image to tweak. It doesn't look bad, okay? If you left one ear normal, we'd still have to change the leader image... 20:16, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (D) - Tweaked
Original artist was Mumble785, and she needed to be darkend, white muzzle removed, and the earpink was inconsistent. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 00:58, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Too much contrast between the highlights and the shading.. x( make them blend into eachother more and blurr it -- 01:26, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- The earpink was bugging me. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 15:37, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Now give the tail more highlight -- 17:19, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

The tail highlight looks fine to me, and that was past 24 hours. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 19:45, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really see anything wrong with this.. Great job! 03:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

There is some highlights on the foot and tail, it looks a bit weird and out of place. Looks great! 00:45, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's supposed to be like that :D. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:53, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mistyfoot (D) ~ Redone
Original artist was Sandstar12. Comments? <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 02:10, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons. The earpink needs to be smaller. The shading also needs to be thinner. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 02:26, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

And rename this 'Mistystar.deputy', so it replaces the original image. 03:24, August 2, 2011 (UTC) Blur the ear pink. 14:22, August 2, 2011 (UTC) There's some waste around the head. 16:08, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading or redo it, it's very blotchy. 18:43, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's so odd... Whenever I try to re-upload over the old Misystar Deputy file, it gives me a permission error and doesn't work. So, that's why I haven't updated this yet. Has this happened to anyone else or does it only happen to this file? <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 00:09, August 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * Icestorm has also told me that she can't upload over her deputy file, so for now, I'm going to withdraw this until we can get these problems figured out. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 19:49, August 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * Nevermind. Mistystar's working with to try and get this to work. So, I take that back. xP ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 21:19, August 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * Uploading over Mistystar's deputy file still isn't working so, I'm going to keep uploading over the old Mistyfoot file for now. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 13:13, August 4, 2011 (UTC) : Have you blurred the shading on 100% with the biggest brush you could? That usually blurs it very well. (sorry if I'm telling you something you already know ^^; ) 03:39, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Re-uploaded. Don't think changes are showing up yet. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 03:12, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Changes are showing up. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:56, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Changes are showing up. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:56, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Changes are showing up. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:56, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

To me, her shading makes her look dappled, I don't know if you were going for that though. -- 02:20, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 03:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Birchfall (W) ~ Tweaked
The original artist was SparrowWing. I just added/darkened shading. 03:33, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pink is to like....dark neon....Maple♥pool<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;"><sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:20, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, it looks kind of sloppy on the haunch. Good job. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:59, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:17, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Could you change the eye pixel? It's too much of a dark orange, make it brighter. 18:42, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the muzzle doesn't look blurred at all, so that could be fixed. Otherwise it looks good! 02:29, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, Rainy. Looks good otherwise! 05:39, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:36, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Triangularize the ear pink. If that's not a real word, then it is now. :) 23:28, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

The paws need to be blurred more and there are some ouh spots around the lineart. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 01:13, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is looking great- I really like the tabby stripes. The earpink is a little low, though, if you know what I mean. 00:13, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was actually me not sparrowwing anyways in the paws and on lineart near the tail the shading is kind of...sharpened so if you can you should try and blur it a little. Also near the chest fur it looks like there's an edge to it like the fur doesn't belong so if you can fix that..yea anyways nice job  --bracken-- ~ 19:05, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Running Horse (E) - Tweaked
Alright, original artist was Ashshadow, added graying muzzle, and it said he had scant fur, so I added scant fur :3. Comments? Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 15:11, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

>Nice job. Brighten the brown. 15:27, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by brighten it? He's a dark brown tom. this is dark brown. Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 15:52, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Bring the graying fur on the top his the muzzle too and darken it a tad. Also, I know the tweaking says nothing about this, but define the ear-pink too. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 16:46, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but it's like....reddish brown. So brighten it a bit. 17:12, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I couldn't brighten it without getting frustrated with how pink it looked, so I redid it. Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 18:31, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

He looks like he's bleeding. D: Try going with a more fleshy tone. 18:56, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and the lineart is all messed up now. It still needs to be lightened a tad more. 19:51, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the patches need to be lightened. Since it says he has scant fur, what you could do was pake him a fleshy color, then add random parts of pelt color on to the skin and blur it in, that way it would look like his fur was thinning. It's just a thought. If not, you'd have to add more fleshy patches to his fur. 01:34, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

^ Ivy, that actually sounds like an interesting idea :). I think I'll try making him a fleshy color and then add patches of fur onto him. Hopefully my serverly-dwindled art skills won't make it look like he needs to wear a bag on his head...;-;. Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 02:20, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, so, I attempted to try what Ivy suggested. I can change it back to normal if desired, but I'm diggin how this looks right now :3. Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 02:54, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Is there such a thing as too blured and smudged? Because it looks a little....odd. Other than that darken ths shading a bit 16:00, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

I think you forgot the link, I linked it for you! Moonstream 04:01, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok the blue is where there is something coming out of the picture, and the green is where some pixls are colored differntly. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 17:36, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the skin more a pale brownish color. Brown-colored Sphynx and example. -- 03:45, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Copperpaw (A) - Tweaked (Redone)
The original artist was Sandstar12 and then tweaked by GroceryBag. I added stripes, and added more shading because it wasn't too visible. I don't know if this would be considered tweaked or redone, because I did this all on the original image, but it looks kind of like it was redone. xD So, comments? 20:00, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing job, Roo. I see nothing wrong with it, really. 21:39, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the shading on the top haunch (Sorta on the back) -- 23:34, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Distinguish the stripes on the legs. 15:29, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail. 17:35, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MCA) ~ Redone
Here he is. Jayfeather's mca redone. Changes aren't showing up yet. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 04:11, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner, like on his MC image, and then blur them his tailtip is a darker color than his stripes. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 15:19, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 22:21, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's some stray lines hanging out around the base of his tail. Erase them.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 04:12, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 04:38, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the haunch Wildfire<sup style="color: gray;">Hazelx <sup style="color: brown;">Thorn! 16:09, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's still some waste by his tail. 21:41, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the stripes. Also, the stripes get lost in the shading. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:00, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make it more like his kit + apprentice + medicine cat blanks. The stripes look nothing like the stripes on his other images. 15:02, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Take the color from his MCA image, or WA image maybe? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:07, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I completely redid the stripes, and changes to color to those from his apprentice charart. I can only hope that I didn't make it worse... xP I kinda picked a bad time to try a different type of tabby I've never worked with before. heheheh... Anyway, comments? <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 23:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Better, there is some waste under his tail, and there is a line coming out of his paws, blur the mottled paws, give him a shorter tail too. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 15:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) - Tweaked
I think I've got mottles down now. The original artist was Hiddensun, and it needed mottles. I think they mostly got lost in the stripes. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 16:03, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see shading. Is this how the image is supposed to be? 05:34, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I don't really like this. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 17:09, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more mottles/stripes? Other than, looking good! ❋Snowpuff❃You make me feel... 21:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't really need any more mottles, I just think she needs a defineable stripe on her face and a larger one on her tail. 21:24, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hadn't realized that I left one of the dapples unblurred. These are dapples, not mottles, sorry for the mistake. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:01, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are really awkward. I hate to say this, but I honestly think they need to be redone. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 01:22, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you explain what you mean by "awkward?" Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:42, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I second your opinion, Darkhallows. I think she meant they were awkward because they went at different angles and there isn't enough, they look really weird and non-realistic. 15:00, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

The herbs seem a little bright to me, so if you think the color is fine, then I guess darken the shading. 03:57, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I hate the shading. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:21, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks better! But the stripes are a little blotchy on the legs. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">Snowdazzle Severus Snape.  19:41, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Raggedstar (W) ~ Tweaked (Redone)
Original artist was Hollytail. It needed thicker, darker shading. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 23:55, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading tons and make ear pink bigger -- 05:44, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes, too. And there's a few stray pixels between the back and tail, and behind the tail. 15:08, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I ended up redoing the charart to make it easier to work with. Changes aren't showing up yet. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 05:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing up, comments? <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 23:50, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

There is a lot of waste around the image that needs cleaning up. 00:48, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I got it all, but due to having lousy eye-sight, i might've missed some. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 01:49, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MC) ~ Tweaked
Needed torn ears. Original artist is Darkhallows. 02:18, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tears look more natural aaaand maybe thin out the outline a bit - 05:46, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Both ears? Well, okay. I'll get to it in the morning. Thanks. I thought they looked a little weird. XD 05:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Give her a flat muzzle(THAT is will be hard, with the herbs...) Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:28, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shorten muzzle isnt that hard. Just move the muzzle lineart three or four pixels into teh face using the float tool. Copy the lineart for the ears from the warrior image. 16:34, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

The float tool? The ears, you should make it more of a V-shape, kinda like Tigerstar. 23:40, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix the ears, but Iceheart, could you explain what the float tool is? Can I do that in GIMP? 23:52, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried. Looks like crap though. 04:29, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is good, but it looks really awkward with the rest of the body. Darken the earpink as well. ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 10:11, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I knew someone was going to say that. The ear pink is directly off of the warrior image. =P 17:16, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Orginal artist was me, Sandy just changed the file name ;P. The earpink looks a little odd along the bottom tear, like the pink extends a pixel too far or something. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 11:42, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. Sorry 'bout that. I'll change it now. I'll fix the ear pink now then, if you really want me to. 18:20, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA)~ Tweaked
I added a torn ear, and shortened the muzzle. I cant shorten it any more without removing the whiskers. Comments? Original artist was Scaletwind. 16:32, August5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it's way too dark. I know you it isn't your problem, but you still should. Make the nicked ear lineart thicker, and if possible make it deeper. 21:29, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the jagged shading into her pelt more so it will look more natural. 21:31, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the torn ear a bit more noticable. 17:26, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make both of her ears torn, like in her other images. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:02, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Snowtuft (W) - Tweaked
Bluestar and Clawface should be archived, since both have gone 24 hours without comments, so I posted this. Original artist was Insaneular and it needed a "snaking" scar. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 00:19, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the scar a bit and add shading to it. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:10, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to start the scar after the ear-pink stops? 01:17, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scar a darker.lighter color, it looks like something went wrong with the ear-pink...O.o Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 01:45, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Just define it where it enters into the earpink somehow, unless it's the wrong color I don't necessarily think you'd need to change the whole color of the scar. 03:45, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, Define the scar and make it look more natural. At the moment it looks like the the scar is connected to the earpink ^.^; ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 10:02, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe spot some very pale gray around the edges of the scar to make it look aged? idk. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 14:37, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I smudged the earpink and didn't make the scar go all the way into the earpink. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:49, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hm. Does it ever say it goes into his inner ear? Cause I reckon you could make it curve up the neck behind the ear.I'm hungry, Phil. FEED ME! 16:41, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

The scar goes from his belly to his ear, as said in his description. <span style="color:white;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:white;">Mintclaw  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  20:52, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Why does the scar start on his haunch? 17:22, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't...it ends on his haunch. xD 18:33, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

But it needs to be darkened a tad, so it doesn't look like the same color of the ear pink. 20:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It supposed to end on his underbelly, I didn't want it to go on the area under the chest because I thought it'd look awkward. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:56, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Try making it go from the back to the belly, instead of from the neck to the belly. It doesn't look right with the earpink :| Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  12:51, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Again, the scar goes from the belly to the ear. I won't change that, it won't be accurate if I do. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine to me. Don't change it. Darken the highlights a tad. 17:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ki) - Tweaked
original artist was Willowheart. I just tore the ears Darkhallows Enter the cave? 04:10, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scars a little deeper on both. Just to match the others. 04:16, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wait...why does a KIT need torn ears?....On the torn ear on <-this side is deeper than the one on -> side Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:50, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

The torn ears could be torn more on both. 17:14, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

The torn ear on <--- side, like the bottom of the ear is bothering me, but i still don't see why a kit needs torn ears, unless he fought has a kit, he wouldn't have torn ears... Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:00, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (A) - Tweaked
original artist was Shimmer. I just torn the ears. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 04:10, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the ear away from us. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:47, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the other ear too. 17:08, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Q)- Tweaked
All I did was change her shade of brown. The original artist was Nightshine. 02:52, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I thought it was the Sharpclaw that needed to be tweaked? 02:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

On the list it said her queen needed to be tweaked, but on her queen's original approval section-thingy, it said they were going to re-do her sharp claw... I'm willing to tweak the other, if you all want. 03:04, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it really matters, so long as in the end, they match. Lighten the brown a bit more and sorta add a tone of yellow to it so it looks like her SC color.<font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 05:31, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. And lighten the ear pink. 20:33, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't lighten the earpink, since it was the same shade as her sharp-claw's. 02:25, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lionblaze (K) ~ Redone


Original artist was Sparrowsong; redone as longhair. Comments? I got all the colors off his original warrior charart, just as his warrior and apprentices' colors came from. 17:01, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and its the second one on the uploading list; I think. 17:05, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Right now it shows me the original version and its like a distorted thumbnail. Wild   breath   17:18, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know. Thats why you have to go to the uploading list to see it. 18:27, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

His stripes need to be a little lighter to match the others. 18:54, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vinestar (L) ~ Redone


Original artist was Honeyfur, and I redid the shading, and ended up redoing the whole thing. 18:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

And changes aren't showing. 18:38, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would it be possible to elongate the tail to match the description? (And personally I think the same should be done with Tallstar, as that's kind of what he's named for) 23:54, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:59, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I reverted the image to the newer image, Misty. Mintstar, I don't think the shading needs to be blurred as you were looking at the old one. Add shading at the end of the tail (make it longer like Shellheart said) and add depth to the eyes. (darker and lighter pixels) 17:03, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Molepelt (MC) - Tweaked
Re-did shading and brightened highlights. Comments? 19:46, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely, brighten the highlights a tad more and I know this isn't in the image criteria. but brighten the ear-pink too. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 02:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: My highlights cannot be brightened, as when I brightened them, I used the color white. White cannot be lightened. I brightened the ear-pink though. 02:07, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D) - Tweaked
Re-did shading, added stripes, and brightened highlights. Comments? 19:46, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights and darken the shading also 20:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

In my opinion, the highlights give the stripes...life....xD You can see the shading perfectly. 21:21, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...the shading looks fine to me. Darken the earpink a tad though ;3 21:30, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make it a tad more gingery :3 Pianokey;  Frédéric François Chopin.  21:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Elorisa, this is her deputy image. It's the same color. I darkened the ear-pink though. 21:34, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I made her deputy image, I know what it looks like. This isn't the same color. It's too brown/yellow. Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin.  21:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I stated it above, I re-did the shading. The shading is probably what's causing it to be brown. 21:37, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Ah, whatever...I brightened the shading a tad. 21:40, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) - Tweaked
- Re-did did shading and brightened highlights. I tried a new way of doing shading, and I like it x3. Please don't tell me to blur the shoulder highlight. It can't be blurred anymore. 23:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's a bit dark compared to her other images. 23:56, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Nice! <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's because of the shading + highlights. Er, Re-Uploaded xD 00:38, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste around the charart around her haunch area. Make the earpink bigger. 01:04, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see the waste on GIMP 02:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can see it, want me to circil it for you? If not, It is under her foot, under her belly, near her foot, and above her back. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

OH I know why it isnt showing you, because, it is so pale, it looks like it isn't there, but if you lean in close, you can see it, it is there, but just BARLEY there. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:48, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfur (Ki) - Tweaked
Original artist was Flamingmom3, and it needed thicker/blurred shading. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten or blur the shading just a teeny tiny bit. (I may be wrong) <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">Snowdazzle Severus Snape.  01:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:25, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt. W) - Tweaked
The original artist was Feathermoon. I just made him gray. 03:19, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Darken the shading a tad and add/darken the shading under the chin. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 03:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:27, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can see a bit of waste around the head and neck. Please erase it that this'll be pretty much ready. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 03:40, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yay. :) 03:47, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wouldn't it just be his default warrior image, since we went with the silver description only with his elder charart? 12:43, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around. But the image looks good! @Shellheart, Longtail's alt. warrior is for the period of time when he was not an elder, but he had been attacked by the rabbit and had scars. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:26, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

He was attacked in FQ, there is a slighty waste under his forepaw closest to us, and und his haunch, and darken the shading a tad, I can't see it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 15:55, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

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Question about Leafstar's images
Ok, I know I put my question in the incorrect place last night, where nobody could see it, so I'm just making a new section for it. On the Nominations page, I had originally put Leafstar's images down as needing cream (I DON'T see cream anywhere on her images), and somebody chnged it to just needing cream stripes. I'm confused as to how she has cream on her: I mostly wanted to clear that up, because I'm doing her queen image, but it'll be hard to make it match if she's not tweaked for the right thing. 16:07, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

There are cream blotches along her haunch, her back, her fore-head, her tail, her stomach, and her left fore-leg. I really like how this is, the cream is nice and soft. I never pictured her with cream blotches patched all over her, I think it was supposed to be much more subtle Night <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">Fall 19:14, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like brownish-ginger to me. Berrynose is cream. 20:17, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well it blends into her pelt more and it looks pretty cream against the brown. It doesn't have to be like Berrynose cream, then it would look kind of odd and stand out too much in my opinion. 17:13, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like highlights to meWildfire 02:34, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Not to me. Highlights are brighter tones of the pelt, but the cream here isn't at all the shade of brown. I think Rainwhisper is right, if we did each cat with the same color of cream, then they wouldn't stand out as individuals. I think every cat that has cream on their fur has a different and unique shade of it. I think she's beautiful as she is Night <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">Fall 02:37, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Well, usually when a cat is cream and tabby it means that their stomache and muzzle are totally cream, such as the white on Billystorm. I think the character art is nice, but the cream is unnatural. 19:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I agree that they look like highlights. Maybe at least add a cream underbelly, chest, or muzzle, like said above? 19:03, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I just really hoped she gets tweaked soon, because while Tweak Week is going on and I can't submit anything, I want to try to get it as ready as I possibly can, since we have a lot of chararts to do, and I need the right cream color (fyi the cream on all her images ARE in fact different, so one has to be picked for all of them) 20:25, July 22, 2011 (UTC) I want to see it drawn more realistically, too. For once, the cover art on the super edition looks closer to her description. Is it on the list for tweaking? 03:25, July 25, 2011 (UTC) Yes, it is. 00:42, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Where is that list, anyway? Is it available to the general public? 00:38, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just don't want to see this image totally redone...one, it's really beautiful as it is, and two, there's nothing that needs to be redone. I can agree that more cream could be added, but I hope that's the only thing that will be done to it Night <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">Fall 16:52, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want it completely redone. I just want to see cream added to her chest in a more natural pattern, like how we make any other chararts with descriptions like hers. Just look at Billystorm. He's described as a ginger and white, and we don't just have little white ripples in his fur. We made his chest, tail, paws, and muzzle white. 20:52, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have to be exactly like Billystorm. I think the image is fine as it is. You can obviously see cream on her fur - but yes, more cream needs to be added, and like Nightfall said, that's the only thing. 21:46, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

The Leafstar image is fine. There are many shades of cream, Daisy's cream is the most common. But, her image is fine.Moon<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">stream 21:00, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't mean that there needs to be more cream. Just that the pattern of cream is unnatural. I honestly think the pattern should be the same as we do with every other cat described like she is (tabby and white, cream, etc). 19:00, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Why though? It excludes all uniqueness if she's just made like all the other cats are. Each cat on this planet is different from the other. Even if you google brown tabbies, you'll get brown tabby cats with thousands of different styles of stripes and shades of brown. Each charart should stand out, not just melt into all the others. Night Fall 23:55, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think waht they mean by brown and cream is waht she looks like on the cover of The Rescue. Wildbreath 18:15, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

No, I only added this because I'm an idiot and can't tell. 19:40, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Cats can come in patterns like that, but the stripes are lightened across the cream bits. So... personally, I think that's what we should do. It should be a pretty quick fix to lighten the stripes on all her images, yes? Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 11:47, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

New Suggestion
I had an idea after looking at the page for Sunfish, who is only ever given a description by her appearance in the manga at the end of Crookedstar's Promise. If a cat only appears in a manga or isn't described in detail in a book but is shown in a manga, can we go with the manga description? I know there would be color problems, but we could just set the charart to generic colors and put 'tabby', 'totoiseshell', 'mottled', or something like that on the page. Just a thought. 17:46, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

It depends on how the character is drawn. 18:39, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

That's the point. It's not that hard to decipher pelt type in the manga. I really wish we'd use this as a rule. It's how we chose Tadpole's description, isn't it? I think so. Plus, I think my dad told me something about how you can convert black-and-white into color, although it won't be as high quality as if it was color to black-and-white. 20:52, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Have we decided on the manga fourm yet? Wildfire 00:59, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice
I become an apprentice today! I rejoined on June 30th. Can someone pwease add me in as an apprentice? Thankies! Ginger is back! and better than ever! 14:05, July 30, 2011 (UTC) 

Someone'll double check, and you'll be added in as an apprentice as soon as the leads have the time. =) 14:48, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in, Ginger. 19:11, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

You're already an apprentice, sorry xD 19:11, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Redoing Images
Redoing every image that is "hard to work with" isnt okay. Reread the guidelines for tweak week. The only images that are to be redone are the ones in the images to be redone section. If the image is to hard for you to tweak, pick another one. If the image is under images to be tweak, just tweak it. 17:38, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Um not really related to whats said /\ But um just wondering, WHY do all ginger cat NEED stripes, at one point when Mossy was leader, she said That ginger cats don't HAVE to have stripes, I just wanna know, why they need stripes. Sorry if I am souding rude. Just wanna know. Maple♥pool<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;"><sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 22:19, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, some images you just can't work with. It's not a big problem, and if the artist can't work with it, then there's nothing against redoing it. Like I said, it's not a problem nor a big deal. If it means making the image look better, which 99% of the time it does, then there isn't a reason for it to just be tweaked. But if it can be tweaked and still look good, then you are right there. But otherwise, redoing it is not a problem at all. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 22:56, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I re-do my images because I find it a lot easier to work with them some of the others. If the shading needs to be fixed, then sometimes it is a lot easier, and a lot more effective, to redo the whole thing. Now, if it's something like blurred lineart, that can be fixed in a matter of seconds. It all depends on what you're working with, honestly. 22:59, July 31, 2011 (UTC) :Also, I think some of the images that are in for tweaking should have been placed in the redone section. But, that's just my opinion. 23:02, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I personally think it should be Ok to redo an image if there aren't any other images for that character. If you redo an image and that character has other images, then you'd have to redo all the others to match it, but I don't really see a problem with redoing the image of a character with only one charart. It's easier and the final image almost always looks a LOT better then it would have if it was just tweaked. ♥ Paleclaw <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:54, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

True that sometimes redoing an image can bring out better results, but it can also take way longer to get approved. With the amount of images nominated for Tweak Week, we can't afford to take time to redo all those images in the limited time we have. If they needed to be redone they would be in the redone section in the nomination forum. I know I'm sounding quite blunt, but we have a limited time, not every warrior is avalible to participate in Tweak Week, and we have a huge list of images needing tweaking. 04:03, August 1, 2011 (UTC) :I disagree; the whole point of the "redone" and "tweaking" sections are to separate the two. Some images need tweaking, but others do not. I think a lot of the really good images that were supposed to have been tweaked were completely redone, and they don't look as good now. They were approved once the way they were, there is no reason for them to be approved all over again with a completely different look. Iceheart is right, if it's too difficult for you to tweak without redoing, then you should pick a different image. Night <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">Fall 05:04, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

You know, you may be right, but, not everyone has the same skill level. As TW goes on, some of the easier images are already done. You can't just expect someone to sit by while everyone else works. They're going to help out, regardless of if they can do it. I know I am. Sometimes with the shading, it can get hard to work with. I've had to re-do an image like that already. I don't think you should tell someone they can't do an image. In case you haven't noticed, a lot of the easy stuff is gone. I know I re-did a few, and one of them is up for approval now. Whitefang. Are you going to decline it because I re-did it instead of tweaking it? Some of the images that needed tweaking were a little messy anyways, so what's it matter? I think some of you guys are just too picky. Kick me out if you will for voicing my opinion. Some of the images that needed to be tweaked looked better off re-done. 05:11, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

The entire point about Tweak Week is to make the images look better. In my opinion, it is unnecessary to tell people they can't re-do images because they weren't on the "tweaking list". If a user has a problem tweaking the image or if it looks plain bad, let them. I agree, it will take a fairly long time to approve, but work harder then. Would you rather have a messy, ugly image and have it take 5 seconds to approve or a nice, clean image and have it take 20 months to approve? 14:57, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Everyone has valid points. But the only problem that I see is if the charart isn't your own so you'd be replacing another artist's work without their permission. Maybe, if you're planning on redoing a charart that isn't your own, you should try to get the permission of the original artist unless they've had no edits for two months. Then, I think it's safe to assume that they've left the wiki. Thoughts? <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 15:04, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Nightfall, Atelda, you are the best. Your points are exactly what i ment. No Cloudskye, we arent telling you not to do chararts, but there are still plenty of easy ones to do. And honestly yes, (Not the ones currently up) I think future unneeded redone images should be declined. As for time, TW has only limited time, if an is that bad, it shouldnt have been approved at all, and none of them really are. We only have limited time, so ya i would prefer the 5 second one. And like Scaletwind said, is it really fair to just hijack someones art? 15:51, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

It does not matter how long the image takes, just as long as it is done. For TW, it should be done quick. Anyways I agree with Cloudskye. You can't tell someone they can't do an image because they can't work with it. If they need to redo it, so be it. If it takes 20 months, it can wait the second TW. Five seconds would have to be tweaked anyways. What if we always made sloppy images? That wouldn't bee good. So if the shading/highlights are unable to be just tweaked, it should be redone. And there isn't a reason to decline them, that's just being picky. As for what Scarletwind said, if they aren't a member in the project, go ahead and take it. If they are a warrior or above, ask permission like she said. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 22:48, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Mintstarr, you're right. If you do decline redone images, then it's just being picky. Y'all are saying hijack like it's a bad thing. Sometimes, it's good re-do images. As I said before, not all of the ones that needed to be tweaked should have even been in that category. Also, Iceheart, easy for you is different then easy for me, so I really don't want to hear that. I really don't think you're getting that not everyone can do the same work, because not everyone's skill level is the same. Y'all just wanna be super freaking picky. *waits to be shot* 00:21, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

No i want to follow the rules of tweak week. And yes people have differnt skill levels, but i just did one where all you had to do was make one ear black. How much kill does that take? There are still plently like that. If you thought that the images should have been redone, you should have put them in the redone section of nominations. Seriously, if you guys are going to comment on this, first read the rules for the past tweak weeks. I bet they didnt have this problem. 00:28, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, for crying out loud, I have read the rules. And I'm not the one that put the images into the "tweaked" list anyways, so don't be telling me that. You're treating us like we're little kids. Just because you're one of the leads, doesn't mean you're 100% right all of the time. Actually, speaking of leads... Where's Darkhallows? I'd like to see her opinion on this as well. 00:33, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I was here last tweak week and I remember some people re-doing images because they were tough to work with. 00:42, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, it does not matter if the image is redone or not. If it looks good and accurate, then there isn't a problem. I'm not trying to be disrespectful, but I agree with Cloudskye all the way. Redoing an image to make it look better is not a problem. It becomes a problem when someone makes it one. If what Icestorm is said is true (which it is because I know she wouldn't lie) then there is nothing wrong with redoing them. If we didn't put them in the tweaking section, it's not our fault. It doesn't harm the wiki or project, so there is no reason to make a big deal over it. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 00:51, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I really never intended for it to seem like im talking down to you guys, sorry bout that. But if you want to make me seem like the bad guy for trying to enforce the rules, fine go ahead. And if we are going to start redoing more images than what are needed, there is one rule that im thinking has to be inforced. In the TW rules it says that all redone images need toge through CBA, with a lead saying it and everything, and we've been ignoring it for now. If we really want theses chararts to look better, we need to be sure of it. 16:13, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

No one's saying you're a "bad guy." Cloudskye and I don't see the reason why the rule has to be so inforced. And I agree with you. If we're completely redoing images, than they should go through the CBA process. It may slow down the process of approving and getting more done, but it makes sense to do that, as it's pretty much making an image out of scratch. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:30, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

How about - the ones that are tough to work with, and the rest of the images on the Tweaking/Re-done list, we do only those? And, if the other images (say if Firestar (L) was on the twaeking list but his warrior wasn't), leave it for another user to do and take another image. 19:13, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I know I'm not really involved in this, but I'll just add my two cents. I'll use an example. I think that the tweak for Firestar needing a scar wouldn't need his WHOLE picture redone (which it wasn't) since the rest was fine, but if it's on the list for something but some of the minor things that it cannot be tweaked for (such as earpink) are wrong, then by all means do that too. Some images don't have on the nominations everything that needs to be done to it, and some people have done their homework and realize that something else is wrong with it. I agree, it's only a problem if someone MAKES it a problem. 23:07, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

First off, Iceheat, I was just about to reply to your message, sorry for the delay. Second, there is a reason images are in the 'tweak' section, they don't need to be redone! If it's hard to work with, leave it to someone moe experienced. Re-doing images is only going to take longer. Try to stick with just tweaking, rather than redoing. Also, someone asked why orange cats needed stripes. Technically all (real) orange cats have stripes, it's just better to have it more realistic. Also, doing stripes is fun ;p (kidding, of course). Darkhallows Enter the cave? 00:59, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Permission Error with images
Hey, has anyone else been getting a window the pops up when you try to upload a file that says Verification Error? I've been getting that when I try to re-upload over Mistystar's deputy charart, so that's why it hasn't been updated yet. I was just wondering if anyone else has been getting that too. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 16:50, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

My bad. Permission Error is what the window said. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 18:50, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

That's what happened with me too. I was accidentally uploading my Mistystar.warrior image as Mistystar.deputy, since I named the file that, and it always said Permission Error. But when I realized my mistake (after freaking 10 times of uploading) I renamed it and it worked. So I think it's the name that's playing up. 19:05, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that is odd. I already messaged Mistystar to ask if the file was locked or something and haven't heard back yet. But I guess, until this gets fixed, Misystar's deputy charart can't be updated. <sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens<sup style="border-width: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: super; line-height: 1em; font-size: 11px;">♌ 04:08, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe upload her file under a different name? 14:25, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Deleted?
I'm no longer on the apprentices section. Did I get deleted for some reason? Ginger<sup style="font-family: Comic Sans; color: rgb(255, 97, 3);"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family: Comic Sans; color: rgb(77, 189, 51);"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family: Comic Sans; color: rgb(29, 124, 242);"> = Unhappy Ginger  20:07, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure...When I was adding in some other users, you were there. 22:31, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I had tht too when I added a white background to all the character base pixils since I agreed to do it. I never have been able to do that. 21:26, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wrong section, oops! It was meant for the above section! 19:34, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Talk Page
What in the name of Starclan happened to the PCA talk page? It's like in one big paragraph D< ❋Snowpuff❃You make me feel... 23:45, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

This happens sometimes, on accident. I know, it does look like a big paragraph :P 02:27, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well, can someone you know...FIX IT? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 18:55, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

We're trying to, it's a matter of intermediate edits. 01:11, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool: That message sounded very demanding and rude. Don't use caps. Of course someone will fix it. You have to be patient. 01:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think I fixed each section. Does it look good? 02:41, August 5, 2011 (UTC) :

Looks much better. Thanks! =) 05:32, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Someone will have to fix the coding mishap underneath where it says, "Discussion" as when I try to edit the whole talk page and put it in source mode, my internet session freezes. 01:03, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Because it is in the different font and slightly different color the coding somethimes shows up as it will in source mode. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 06:51, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Page should be good now. I fixed up what was left. =) 17:21, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry if I sounded rude.....didn't mean to, I'm sorry, but, someone needs to fix it again...something went wrong..... Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 13:22, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's not rude, you're right. It's all wonky. I might have a look but cannot guarantee I can fix it. 14:37, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, I was responding to Icestorm....didn't mean to be rude....Dx...and see what you can do, I would fix it...if I knew how, but I know what happend, two people edited the page at the same time, and when they saved it, it ended up looking like does now.... Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:29, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'd fix it if I could! For future guidance, new people, if you see this happen as a preview when you edit, don't save it! 00:19, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's not so much previewing the page, it looks more like a conflict error damage. As in if once you click the publish button and the site redirects you to the edit window again, click out of it and just post your comment again. 00:26, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentince
Can I be an apprentince? 18:38, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Do you know what date you were added as a kit? ❋Snowpuff❃You make me feel... 23:20, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Around June 30th, i beleve

18:15, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

The Rescue
Are we going to do the cats in the Rescue? If not we need to decide because we never did vote on that. Wildfire 22:48, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

We've done cats for all of the other manga. Why would this be different? Is there really a need to vote? 23:16, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sure we are going to do The Rescue characters, there is no need for a discussion or vote ;3 01:11, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Plus, some of them the colors were said by them or the other characters (like when Leafstar was naming her kits and she said what color they were) 21:28, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

okay but what about manga alts we haven't decided that. Wildfire<sup style="color: gray;">Hazelx <sup style="color: brown;">Thorn! 00:26, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we don't do manga alts as there are to many of them. 15:13, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice? 8D
I finally get to become an apprentice <3. May I? C: 13:51, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Do you know the date you joined? 01:14, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

July 6th 16:40, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Bumping. Only doing so because Shellheart got approved and I didn't... 14:27, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Join Request
Hi! Could you please add me? I would appreciate it very much! <font color="red" face=segoe script">Cloud <font color="orange" face=segoe script">claw1 <font color="green" face=segoe script">Fly  <font color="blue" face=segoe script">the  <font color="purple" face=segoe script">winds...  22:49, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I put this in a separate heading. And yes, you may join! A lead will add you soon, and you'll be added as a kit, so you can't do chararts for a month, you can only comment on them. 01:14, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I have been waiting for the day but no one has added me as a kit yet if you could do that when you get the chance i would really appreciate it. :)

I love tigerheart 02:53, August 8, 2011 (UTC)I love tigerheart

Of course you two can join! I'll add you in now. Please look at our basic guidelines to get you started. Also, I'd advise you to keep an eye of the talk page, we're currently debating the kit system. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:37, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

2 things, joining, willowbreeze
Hi I was wondering if I could join projecect Character art. Because I am pretty good at drawing charart, And I would really like to contribute to it. The other thing is that Willowbreeze doesn't have a warrior charart, or a queen charart. I was already starting on the warrior charart. So please let me join I would really love to help. I will probably give the charart to Atelda or Frostheart. They may edit and do what they like. Thank you for reading.

I love tigerheart 16:20, August 7, 2011 (UTC)I love Tigerheart :)

Hello, thanks for the intrest in joining, wait for one of the leads to add you, then you'll be a kit, but, sadly, you can't put up any images for one month after you are added, Thank you^^ Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:27, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thank you. I dont mind waiting for a month.

I love tigerheart 00:28, August 8, 2011 (UTC)I love tigerheart

Apprentice
Okay, I've been here long enough to be an apprentice. :3 17:10, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

What date did you join? 18:42, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

July 7th. 19:09, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

That's exactly a month- right on time! You'll be an apprentice shortly, when someone adds you in as one... 00:21, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Expanding
We need to expand Tweak Week, but was it ever decided that we would expand it or end it on the 7th? <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:23, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking of adding a week... it's already past the 7th xD. We still have a ton to do. We can't finish it all... but it'll give us a little more time. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 23:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

i counted the images...and i lost count...you may want to add more than a week, Darkhallows.... Maple♥  pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:52, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, we should expand tweak week to maybe the end of august. We still have like 20 some chararts to get through. Maybe also enlist some of the more senior apprentices for assistance? Some examples being Maplepool, Moonleaf, Ivystripe, and Leopardclaw. Because, honestly, we need more help. Thoughts? <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:29, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. Agreed. Maybe some more apprentices? 00:33, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, but we don't too many apprentices to help out. But we don't want the ones who don't get to help out hurt. I think the four we have now are fine. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:40, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking maybe we could make tweak week a permanent thing. Like how we have the section for images pending approval, and for discussion, we could have a third one for tweaking. We could continue to add images to the forum as we see needed, and it would remove people posting chararts at random, with just a torn ear added. I would also take away the time press, and personally I think that would make the chararts better. Thoughts? 01:18, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

We would have to shorten the limit of images, though. So, in the template on PCA's main page, we could have: One charart for tweaking, one for regular. 01:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

If you guys end up wanting my help, I would be willing to. Just remember, we DO have a lot of regular images to be done, so if it is decided on an extension, please be mindful of that, as there are many pages without a charart at all. I have always thought a permanent tweak section would be a good idea, though. 03:06, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know about a permenant tweaking section... but I think we need to do this more than once a year. Maybe 3 or 4 times for around 2 weeks each? Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 11:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think a permanent tweaking section is a good idea. However, we can't just put up any picture we see because there is just a tiny tiny thing that's a bit off. So I say we have a forum, as Iceheart said, and a lead can make sure that the image is okay for tweaking. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:03, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I agree as well, what Iceheart said is good idea. Like for Brook, she needs a torn ear for all of her images, she got the torn ear in....The sight i think, when Hollleaf went to get some herbs....Don't rember it all but so, for images like that, it would be added to the forum if we agrre to it? Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:14, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Kit
Hi I would like to be taken in as a kit. I would love to start my own charart. Please message me soon.

Featherferal :) 15:14, August 8, 2011 (UTC)Featherferal

Of course you can join! I'll add you in now. Please look at our basic guidelines to get you started. Also, I'd advise you to keep an eye of the talk page, we're currently debating the kit system. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Kit
Can I become a kit? I know how to do Carart. - Skullmeerkat

Of course you can join! I'll add you in now. Please look at our basic guidelines to get you started. Also, I'd advise you to keep an eye of the talk page, we're currently debating the kit system. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Kit system discussion
I have moved the discussion about improving/removing the kit system to the forum and can be found here. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Kit?
Can I become a kit? I have Microsoft Paint and Gimp. I can do the colors, the ear pink (including blurring it) and eyes. But I cant do shading, dodging or burning.Fallenstars

Good, but please sign with four ~'s so we know who you are and can add you! We'd love to have you join! 02:07, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can I become a kit? I have Microsoft Paint and Gimp. I can do the colors, the ear pink (including blurring it) and eyes. But I cant do shading, dodging or burning. Fallenstars Sure, I'll add you in now. Please look at our basic guidelines to get you started. I'd also advise that you keep an eye on the talk page because we are currently debating the kit status. Also please remember to sign all your posts with 4 (~_ <font color="#f7d86d">♌[[User:Scarletwind|<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 02:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok! Thank you.

Brook's Charart
Hi. I'm a kit on here, and I was just looking over random pages and I came across Brook's page. Under her description, it says she has a torn ear, but on her charart, she doesn't have a torn ear. I just wanted to mention this.

<font color="#00ffff" style="background:black;">Twilightheart <font color="#0099ff"> Spammer DERP!! :D 03:47, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

This may be on the list for tweaking and just hasn't been done yet or it will just be tweaked next TW. Thank you for the heads up. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 03:49, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth..
OK I'M NOT WARRIOR! AND I KNOW IT BUT PLEASE READ THIS AND ANSWER...

It's Tweak week and I saw some chararts..they looks very bad. like Jaggetooth..I'm sorry, I know I'm only apprentice but I made new Jaggedtooth's rogue image...but you wont't accep it. I'm only want help..yes? Thanks Leaf-storm,11:18,August 9,2011(UTC)

This is awesome! You'll be a warrior soon, I hope. Well done! How did you make those stripes btw? 11:33, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I wouldn't mind using this to replace Jaggedtooth's image (did we really let that get approved? o.o). If no one has any objections, I think we can go ahead and let you put this up for approval. This would be an exception and not something I would generally consider, but this is really good xD. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 11:55, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright if we're going to include apprentices we have to include Leaf-storm. I agree, this is really good. Some early comments...xD darken the shading. 12:37, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

You're not seriously going to approve this? I agree, it's great, but is is truly fair to just let Leafstorm, only an apprentice, put up a charat? I'm sure a lot of the apprentices make great charats, just as good as this, but since we can't participate in Tweak Week, no one knows what ours would look like! I agree with Leaf, some do look awful, and I would love to see where others can go with them. But just to let Leafstorm put one up, just because they put up an example you liked...it doesn't seem fair to the other apprentices who can't participate :3 Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  13:02, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think Leafstorm has been here for quite awhile. He/she was removed when Nightshine was removing inactive apprentices, which I don't know why, and that was awhile ago. It looks good, but I can see what Gingertail is saying. But, then again, we are considering more apprentices, so I think Leafstorm should be part of the apprentices tweaking. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:06, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentices can tweak images now?

Sorry that ^^ was me. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">Snowdazzle Severus Snape.  14:11, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I'm confused about this as well. Does this mean all apprentices, or just Leaf-storm? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:57, August 9, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

We're allowing this to be posted. However, we might let some more apprentices be allowed, adn those are: Maplepool, Ivystripe, and some more I can't remember xD 16:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I see. Thanks. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 16:03, August 9, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Wow, Leafstorm, that is a very dazzling image! Early comment as well, Darken ear pink, other that, I find noting wrong with this! Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

So, would you like my help then? And this is AMAZING! Great job Leaf-storm! 16:16, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, just saw you want my help, I feel so loved xD @Rainy what i think Leafstorm did, was on gimp, taken the pen tool, set it to the smallest settings, and do it that way, 'cause, I really don't think Pixrl's pen tool can do that, even at like one. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:33, August 9, 2011 (UTC)