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=Tweaking=

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
Added teh stripes to the tail~Comments? 11:08, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the stripes? They make the tail look purple. Skt Spoilers... 12:51, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaed o3o 11:58, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Try and make them look like her apprentice's. 20:29, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Just take the color you're using right now and up the red value. 05:47 Tue Jun 26

No, the stripes on this are fine. It's the apprentice that needs to match the elder, since it was put up first.

Actually since the kit's already approved, the color needs to match that one. Either ask Mounty for the colors, or simply listen to what she said about making it more red and you should be fine. 05:57, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Kay so I used #aa4b34 06:03 Tue Jun 26

Re-uploaded 06:46, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes and make the ear-pink a bit redder 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The furry effect needs to be smudged an blurred, and perhaps lightened. It looks like tabby stripes on the brown. 06:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't smudge it, because it's smudged to the limit; but it has been blurred. The earpink will remain untouched, since it's from the warrior. 16:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brown's too dark and the furry texture still looks like stripes. 00:30, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to her tail. Comments? 19:25, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 22:36, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And this is what happens when you forget to save the xcf. file -_-  01:54, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more? c: 05:54 Sat Jun 23

Reuploaded Tried :P  02:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be darkened. 18:03, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened it just a tad bit more. I could darken it a little more if it still isn't that visible, but I just want to be careful and make sure people can still see the stripes. 02:08, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the elder, please?

Actually they need to match the kit since that was the first approved, rather than the first put up. And I think they're rather close to the kit right now, so I'd say they're fine. 05:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Hollowbelly (W) - Redone
Not quite as epic as Cloudy's, but I think it turned out okay. I also decided to make him a short-hair to save me some grief. The old one--(oh gosh...) Over smudged, literally no shading, and just looked like a fluffy marshmallow with tar. Comments? 01:34, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. (oh, hush. xD)

Re-uploaded I will not hush! xD 04:13, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his haunch a tad -- 04:26, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white part of his nevk..or whatever it is. Mmmm tar marshmallow Skt Spoilers... 08:20, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:26, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the bottom on this <--- side of the white patch on his chest? (Confusing. If you need a better explanation, then I can make a circle on the image of where.) 00:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:01, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

The neck marking looks a little too smudged in my opinion  03:31, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:06, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Lo) ~ Redone
Before anyone starts complaining, I did get permission to redo this. It didn't match in the slightest and would have been really hard to tweak. Since it's my image I don't see a problem with redoing it. Comments?

Can you blur the smudges a little more?

Re-uploaded 20:33 Sun Jun 24

Blur the haunch shading a bit. Skt Spoilers... 22:29, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:50 Sun Jun 24

Define the shading on the head. Breeze whisker  16:52, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Magpie (Lo) ~ Tweaked
If I need to say who the OA is, you guys are blind. <3 I wanted to make him long hair, and I re-did the shading.

I guess I'm blind then  Can you darken the hading a tiny bit on his muzzle and chest? 17:56, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, since it would make the white look darker than it needs to be. (  Me, you dork. XD   )

Orly. I knew that. Okay, can you at least lighten the shading on his haunch? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, but if others agree, I'll do it.

The shading's opacity is fine, but you might blur it a little. 68.103.240.28 16:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)


 * That was me, sorry. Breeze  whisker  16:51, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you possibly define the depth of the eye? Fluuuuufy Skt Spoilers... 21:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine. I didn't even touch those. XD

Re-uploaded. Woo, eye color change.

Hollowflight (A) - Redone
- His pale belly went too far into his stomach, he was too dark, and his stripes were too oversmudged. And oh my god I failed on this one. Especially the smudging...Comments? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! :3 Just smudge the pale belly a bit to look like the other image. ^^  02:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

His pale belly isn't smudged in his warrior...at least, not as far as I can tell. 02:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yes it is. Please smudge it. 06:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

And can you make the unshaded brown a tad lighter? (I think that's the word I'm after) Skt Spoilers... 10:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Skt, the "unshaded" brown's color code was taken from the warrior image. But if others agree, I'll lighten it. 18:00, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but I agree. Either that or thin out the shading a bit and add/brighten the highlights. 05:25, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to have to re-do this because I got my computer back and my file isn't on this....and the computer I was doing Hollowpaw on is broken. So this is going to be redone later. 17:15, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderstar (Lo) - Redone
...He gets green eyes because they look sexy. OA was Sweetflower with a redo by moi. Ugly patch is ugly x.x 22:39, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you remove the patch? (Unless it's going to be moved there.) 22:45, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, the whole point was so that he'd have the patch on his visible shoulder. Since this is his main image, half of his description should be part of it, eh? 22:49, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Try making the patch the same color as the old one and maybe smudge it like it was too. 22:51 Sun Jun 24

Re-uploaded. Eh. 23:08, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Loonie, this is amazing, and the patch is amazing too. Don't go doubting. Could you define the shading a little bit though? 00:58, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you dear 8D 01:12, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be my computer or my horrible eyesight, but it looks a bit purple... 01:56, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

No, I believe it looks fine. 04:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Looks kinda like there's a stripe bleeding through the patch. Lovely Loon~ <3 06:53, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

That's because their skin is different colours depending on their stripes o3o If you've ever shaved a tabby cat (not like I have... -runs-) then you can still see the tabby pattern despite the lack of fur. 16:52, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

This could just be me but the stripes look... red. Owo Make them less red if you agree. 10:08, 26, 06, 2012

They're fine, imho.

Mumblefoot (E) - Tweaked
Tweaked color to be more brown. I think this is too dark though. OA was Paleh (I think) Comments? e.e 08:05, 25, 06, 2012

I dunno about the darkness, but make the skin less fluro. Skt Spoilers... 12:42, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I so failed on that. -has no brain- xDDD 10:01, 26, 06, 2012

Can you make the patches a little less neon? 15:38, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Scarlet and I re-did the shading ouo Comments? 09:21, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Skt Spoilers... 11:05, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I also lightened the shdaing. I felt it was too dark~ 09:47, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't really look brown, in my opinion... Can you fix that? 15:57, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderstar (L) - Redone
Same as the loner. OA was some sexy person named Oblivion. 16:55, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

'Tis is beautiful, Loonie. <3 Can you darken the shading on the head area? 17:33, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:54, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Errr yeah, if the stripe color changes on the loner then this has to too. Don't eat me please! Just make them less red... if you agree. 10:18, 26, 06, 2012

Again, stripes are fine.

Gorgeous <33 Could you put the shading layer below the eye layer? Unless that's the artists choice, (If it is sorry) -- 19:17, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, that's entirely artist's choice, Raven. I think it looks neat like that. ^^;

Oakheart (Alt.Kit) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to match alt deputy. Not sure about changes. 17:58, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? Unless it already matches the deputy. 17:59, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:32, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Magpie (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and I made him longhaired. Fluffy. <3

I can't see anything wrong with it...<3   I like fluffy cats     18:32, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Icy, no need to comment saying you see nothing wrong on tweaks. If there's nothing wrong they'll be archived when the time's up. Any chance of you making the eyes a more natural color, since both images are being tweaked anyways? 05:02, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

They're blue. What's unnatural about them? Actually, I think when I made these, I took the colors from the eye chat, 'cause I was lazy. I think they're fine.

Re-uploaded. Meh.

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just made her a bit darker to match her other images. 02:20, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading, if possible?

Reuploaded  02:32, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad, and make the shading less brown tinted and more of a grayish color for consistancy. :3 09:22, 26, 06, 2012

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing, I believe. ^^  15:53, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the belly highlight, and the haunch one too? 17:49, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Birdy (Ki) ~ Tweaked


I swear on my family and friend and my first unborn child's lives, I swear on my Aunt Tina and Patpa's graves, I swear to the face of God. This isn't redone. I say that very solemly. I opned up her files I saved, delted her shading file(Only way to tweak her shading) and redid her shading, killed the blurred lineart, and made the blob on her forehead look like a stripe. OA was Sandstar12 with a redone by some freak named Padfoot. Comments? 02:25, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Oi, Maple. That's not really necessary... Anyways, define the shading.

Define and enlarge the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 10:56, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I said that, Skye, because I showed it to some people, and they all thought it looked redone. The shading...I'll fix that now. To dark in some places.... 17:00, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Could you also give it a light source? Right now, it just seems like a blotch of shading.

Sasha (Q) - Redone
Whoo her last image! Colors, shading opacity, etc. are all the same as her other images. Not changing those. OA was Rainwhisper. Redone for the same reasons as her other images. Comments? 04:58, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo) ~ Redone
Took both the pelt and shading colors from the main queen and kittypet's colors, since the alt queen doesn't really match the other images that well. OA was Thistleshine, and it had to match the other images better. Comments? I seem to be the only one who actually likes doing cream cats. 05:34, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly shading? <3 Love it! 15:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And the leg shading. 21:39, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (A) - Tweaked
Redid the stripe pattern and darkened the shading a touch, but everything else is the same; colors, etc. Comments? 21:33, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. - 21:38, June 26, 2012 (UTC)