Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Nominations/Approved 6

Nightkit (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Nightkit.kit.png Shading needs to be defined. Cloudy still has the layers and says she wants this. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Raindrop (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Raindrop.kit.png Needs to be lightened and shading defined. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 04:18, 13, 07, 2012

Rockshade (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Rockshade.kit.png Highlights need to be dulled and blurred. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Rosepetal.kit.png Shading needs to be darkened. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Can I do this one since I'm an OA? 03:02, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Runningstorm (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Runningstorm.kit.png Darken shading. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 04:21, 13, 07, 2012

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Shrewpaw (TC).kit.png Define shading. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 04:23, 13, 07, 2012

Smallstar (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Smallstar.kit.png Darken shading. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * All my kitten's are being tweaked. ;.; Anyways this be done.  04:27, 13, 07, 2012

Stonefur (Ki, alt. kit) - Tweak Nomination
File:Stonefur.kit.png File:Stonefur.kit.alt.png Define shading. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * For the alt, yes, for the kit, I think it's fine. 04:31, 13, 07, 2012

Tawnypelt (Alt. Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Tawnypelt.kit.alt.png Define shading and dull color a bit. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 04:35, 13, 07, 2012

Tigerstar (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Tigerstar.kit.png Define shading. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 02:44, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt. ki2) - Tweak Nomination
File:Willowshine.kit.alt2.png Blur shading a bit. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing - Tweak Nomination
File:Mothwing.mc.png et al. Need moar shading. I would like the warrior, kit, and mc if this passes. ouo 00:51, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * 02:27, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Can I do her apprentice and mca? ouo;; 02:40 Fri Jul 13
 * Can I do her apprentice and mca? ouo;; 02:40 Fri Jul 13

Swoop (KM) - Redo Nomination
File:Swoop.km.png - Doesn't really match the cg in stripe color or pattern. I'd also like to redo the mud and the shading needs to be darkened. Might as well make it a redo. I'd like this if it passes. 02:55, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah... I think it could match a little better...
 * Technically the queen was up and approved first, and the CG should have matched that, but.... 09:06, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * I personally like the cg's more... o3o 04:38, 13, 07, 2012
 * Yeah, I think the cg looks fine. Breeze  whisker  04:32, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Skywatcher (E) - Tweak Nomination
File:Skywatcher.elder.png - Honestly, I think I could do a better job. His earpink and scars look neon (and scars and earpink don't usually match anyway) and I'm doing something with his raggedness in his rogue image, though this may not need it since I may take it away and I'm not the OA of the longer. Oh well. Let's see. I think the shading could be blurred better, and I've gotten better at making scars realistic. However, since this is my image, obviously I want it. 04:59, July 13, 2012 (UTC) If you hadn't nominated it, it would've been soon enough. 15:04, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * Go kill 07:50, 14, 07, 2012
 * Yeah, I know you can do much better, Ivy.

Sunfish (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Sunfish.kit.png Define shading a bit. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:24 Thu Jul 12
 * 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * owo 04:33, 13, 07, 2012

DJ, you can't just votenay without a reason... The nominator needs to know why you don't want it. 04:36, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm not the only one who's done this before... and plus I think the shading's fine... 04:59, 13, 07, 2012
 * Just a tad...

Sorreltail (Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Sorreltail.kit.png Define shading. 09:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * Just a little. 02:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * I personally think it's fine. 04:29, 13, 07, 2012
 * The shading on the white is fine, I'd say...but it could be defined on the rest of the body.
 * 06:47 Sun Jul 15

Heatherstar (L) - Tweak Nomination
File:Heatherstar.leader.png The shading could be defined a bit. Anyone can have this if it passes. 22:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC) The shading placement on her tail also needs to be changed to make it look like she doesn't have a pale tailtip. 23:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16:58, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
 * 16:58, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) - Tweak Nomination
File:Bluestar.kit.alt.png Pretty much, the shading needs tweaking. That dark patch of shading is really bugging me, and the tail and head shading needs to be defined. Earpink is a bit too redish, and could be tweaked. The overall the shading is flat, except the highlight on the chest. The shading I did on this image bugs me I'd like this if it passes. 06:58, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * 07:01 Sun Jul 15
 * Mhm 03:09, 16, 07, 2012

Pinestar (Alt. L) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Pinestar.leader.alt2.png - It doesn't look fox red at all. I'd like this and to save us all some grief, I'd prefer to just redo it. 02:16, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait, if Oakheart doesn't get a fox red alt because it's too similar, how come Pinestar does? Skt Omnia vincit amor 02:22, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * When I think of fox-red, I think of a shade somewhere between Redtail's tail and his russet alt. That seems different enough. As for Oakheart, I think that's different enough, but we can bring that up on the discussion page. If it seems fair, since this is in the discussion stage, then I can decline this to be sure that Pinestar still deserves this alt. 02:55, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * Fox-red/russet isn't two shades from red-brown. He shouldn't have the alt, and Oakheart shouldn't get one. 08:40, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * It really is quite a difference though. Red-brown. A fox. Breeze  whisker  17:35, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't think there's much difference. That red-brown cat picture is a red-brown cat, but it isn't the same shade as Pinestar's images, therefore means that the difference between red-brown and fox-red will change. So I say no alt. owo 08:06, 09, 07, 2012
 * Well, if the shade doesn't match an actual reddish-brown cat, shouldn't it be changed so it does? Those two pictures show a vast difference. One's an actual reddish color, and the other is (for lack of a better descriptive word) pretty much orange. XD
 * It needs to be changed. 20:14, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, it does.
 * 16:57, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarpelt - Redo Nomination
File:Cedarpelt.warrior.png - He's not mottled. There's dots on him. In addition, those stripes look pretty triangle-y to me. I'd like this if it passes. 20:14, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * I feel the stripes could be defined and have a few more but I don't think this needs redone 22:43, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
 * Meh, I think it'd be better off redone. 09:22, 18, 07, 2012
 * I know it has three yay votes but it looks fine... *sigh* -- 10:52, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * I know it has three yay votes but it looks fine... *sigh* -- 10:52, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Tallstar (Alt. L) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Tallstar.leader.alt.png His tail should be tweaked to be longer. 13:40, July 18, 2012 (UTC)


 * 17:17, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">08:24, 19, 07, 2012
 * Breeze whisker  17:34, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Starlingwing (A/W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Starlingwing.apprentice.png File:Starlingwing.warrior.png Not really sure whether this would be a tweak or redo, but the stripes aren't very realistic and (unless it's my computer...) the colours seem a little off. I'd like the warrior, comments? 08:39, July 1, 2012 (UTC)


 * I think I have to agree with you owo. A tweak would do, just slight tweaks to the stripes. <span style="">09:48, 01, 07, 2012
 * How are the stripes unrealistic? They look fine to me. And the color's ginger. There's no specified shade for the ginger, so it matches description fine. There's no need to tweak this really. 11:59, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think that the warrior image should just be tweaked so that the stripes match the apprentice better.  16:06, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, I agree with Misty. The warrior's stripes could be tweaked. 14:58, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * Agreeing with Misty. <span style="">04:54, 04, 07, 2012
 * I agree too. 18:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
 * The warrior was approved first, the apprentice show match that. 08:57 Sun Jul 8
 * Yes, but the apprentice seems more realistic o3o <span style="">07:18, 09, 07, 2012
 * Yea, I think the apprentice looks more realistic. -- 16:25, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
 * So are we going with the apprentice then? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  07:32, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

The warrior is being tweaked to match the apprentice. 21:38, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Voletooth - Redo Nomination
File:Voletooth.apprentice.png et al. See here. I'd like the elder if this passes. 21:42, July 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * How are they realistic stripes? Find me a picture of a cat that has those stripes, and I'll change my mind. o.o
 * Can I haz elder and warrior? owo;; 21:50 Thu Jul 19
 * Yeah, sure. I see no issue with that. =3
 * May I have the apprentice? Breeze  whisker  22:00, July 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:13, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Hattie ~ Redo Nomination
File:Hattie.kittypet.png Okay, you're probably gonna shoot me. But those stripes are triangles. Basically the same as [] .i also think the shading needs defining and blurring. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:13, July 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yessssss~ I nominated this before ilu ;u; 23:30 Thu Jul 19
 * I won't shoot. I agree. 8D

Uh... Can I steal? <3 23:34, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W + A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Thistleclaw.warrior.png File:Thistleclaw.apprentice.png Shading needs to be defined on both of them. I'd like the warrior if it passes.
 * lolyes 21:53 Thu Jul 19

21:57, July 19, 2012 (UTC) Can I have the apprentice? 21:57, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Wing Shadow Over Water ~ Redo Nomination
File:Wing.ph.png File:Wing.km.png Face it, both images could use some fixing up, and the gray on the PH looks like icky shading, still. Loonie suggested it to me on Skype, and I'm up for it. If this passes, I'd like both images. 8D 00:36, July 22, 2012 (UTC  00:45, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sure <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  00:48, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Bramblestar (D) - Tweak Nomination
File:Bramblestar.deputy.png - The stripes on the cream don't look like they should, and the cream could be blurred. When we changed his chest to cream, he was snapped up before I could actually tweak him. I'd like to re-tweak him, since I have the layers and I can just put the cream under the stripes. 23:03, July 22, 2012 (UTC)


 * Go for it. 23:07, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * You should have gotten it in the first place. It was called to the OAs.... 23:10, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
 * ... 00:10, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Troutclaw ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Troutclaw.elder.png Could have a matted head. ^_^ 00:00, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 17:52, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
 * 00:34, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">10:10, 24, 07, 2012

Splashheart (W & L) - Tweak Nomination
File:Splashheart.warrior.png File:Splashheart.leader.png Can I please please kill the shading? The warrior just looks like it has a layer of black over it, and the leader is all blotchy. I'd like both of them. 18:32, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, kill with fire plz.
 * ^  18:48, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * 00:24, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Alt Kit) - Redo Nomination
File:Sweetpaw.kit.alt.png Alright, please don't murder me in my sleep, I have a few reasons why I'm nominating this. Firstly, I think she looks like a triangle tabby. Secondly, she's not entirely mottled, she looks more like the just has a spotted face. The shading needs defined, as does the earpink on <--- that side. I think there's also blurred lineart on the legs. Out of respect for Rainy, she can have it if she wants because she is the OA, but if she chooses not to, then I'd like this. Now, if you still want to murder me in my sleep, just make it quick ._. 18:25, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * Though it is hard to get a good tabby on those tiny kit blanks, I think you're right. 18:39, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
 * If Leggy wants first dibs, by all means, let her have it. If not, you're right...and those kit blanks are a pain in the shading place. e.e
 * Mmm e3e <span style="">08:35, 25, 07, 2012

Leafstar (Q) - Redo Nomination
File:Leafstar.queen.png I really think I could do a much better job on this. It just doesn't really look like it matches much and the way I did the stripes looks ugly. Please let me kill it with fire? 18:08, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * Doesn't really match either. 18:16, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 20:38, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * I agree. I know you can do better.

Petalnose ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Petalnose.warrior.png (et al) She's supposed to be an almost white. She looks like she /is/ white. I think these could be darkened a tiny smidge to look very pale grey rather than white. 00:24, July 25, 2012 (UTC)


 * Meh, only a smidge. owo <span style="">08:31, 25, 07, 2012
 * I agree. ^ -- 20:46, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * The shading on the warrior could also be blurred a little. Breeze  whisker  22:34, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Petaldust - Tweak Nomination
File:Petaldust.warrior.pngFile:Petaldust.apprentice.pngFile:Petaldust.kit.png Since the other is just sitting there, they all should be tweaked so they match each other, and the markings and shading need to be defined on all of them. Breeze whisker  22:51, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * 03:53, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">08:27, 26, 07, 2012
 * <span style="">08:27, 26, 07, 2012

Brokenstar (E, Alt. E) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Brokenstar.elder.png File:Brokenstar.elder.alt.png I think these two could use a little more raggedness to them. Compare them to the other images, and they seem to be lacking a little bit. The images themselves are fine, though.


 * Not too much though. <span style="">08:28, 26, 07, 2012

Can I steal the elder? 18:13, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 23:50, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Silvermask.deputy.png The shading doesn't look much like shading, and has no real depth to it. I still have the file from when I tweaked it the last time, so I'd like it. 23:46, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 23:50, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
 * 00:40, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Antpelt (Ro) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Antpelt.rogue.png Ah, my first approved image<3 Shading needs defining and since it's mine, I'd like it. 07:36, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Define plz.
 * The earpink could also use some defining :3 20:29, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Agreeing with Misty. 22:51, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shadepelt (W/E) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Shadepelt.warrior.png File:Shadepelt.elder.png Shading needs to be blurred. OCD moment hee, but also I think the earpink on the warrior image could be made smaller and more triangular. I donut want either of 'em. 22:29, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah. Could I have the warrior? <span style="">02:32, 28, 07, 2012
 * 23:32, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:43, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png Needs a gray muzzle like the one on the kittypet charart. I donut want it either. 00:50, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * True. Also if you don't want it just don't say anything. ;) <span style="">02:39, 28, 07, 2012
 * and possibly dull those highlights a bit. lolwhoops 23:32, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * 21:44, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Runningstorm.warrior.png Shading should be darkened and defined a bit. I'd like this, since I did it :3 21:48, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * Can you try and make that earpink not so red, as well?
 * <span style="">02:33, 29, 07, 2012
 * 15:59, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Mudfur (MC) - Tweak Nomination
File:Mudfur.mc.png Pale belly needs to be defined. 16:43, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Also maybe define the mottles atad. 16:46, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * I made the MCA match this, so if this needs tweaked so badly, I might as well tweak the MCA a second time 17:05, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks fine to me 18:59, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
 * Nope. If there was an issue with it, it should have been brought up on the tweak page. These were just recently done, and I find the images wonderful.
 * But it does look like it needs to be defined... <span style="">09:26, 31, 07, 2012
 * I can see the pale belly much more clearer on the other images, (including the MCA), so I think it needs to be defined.  15:58, July 31, 2012 (UTC)

Fernpelt - Tweak Nomination
File:Fernpelt.apprentice.pngFile:Fernpelt.warrior.png Kay, since we decided it needed a shading tweak, I'm putting it up. I think the apprentice looks a little lacking in the shading area too (haha, based on inside jokes that sounded kinda awkward). 18:05, July 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * Can I still take both of them, please? 18:18, July 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, of course, Silver. ^^;;
 * 03:22, August 1, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">09:35, 01, 08, 2012

Mudclaw (WC) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Mudclaw (WC).warrior.png File:Mudclaw (WC).deputy.png They need to be tabby, and the images don't exactly match, anyways. It would be much better off as a redo. I'd like the deputy if this passes, and Icy's voiced a want for the warrior. 03:07, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
 * <span style="">07:44, 02, 08, 2012
 * Breeze whisker  20:24, August 2, 2012 (UTC)