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Leafpool's Wish/Chapter 9 ~ Silver Nomination
Wrote this back in January and forgot about it. Comments?
 * Minor thing, but for most chapters if the page numbers aren't known they say 'N/A'.


 * In the 2nd paragraph, "As a medicine cat, she knows something is wrong because the pain should fade, as the kit shifts." It just sounds a bit strange with the way the commas are and how the sentence is phrased. It might just be me, but I'd suggest reading that sentence over.


 * And in the last paragraph, "They name the kits, Hollykit, and Lionkit." idk, but I don't think the first comma is needed after kits. Maybe it is though, I'm not sure. 23:55 Thu Apr 21

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At the end of the fifth paragraph, reword the last sentence, as it implies that Brackenfur knows about the kits. In the second to last paragraph, in the last sentence, reword the sentence to something like "Leafpool thanks Squirrelflight for what she is going to do for her." In the last paragraph, fix the sentence "They name the kits Hollykit, and Lionkit." to "They name two of the kits Hollykit and Lionkit."

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Comments before vote? 15:30, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Twilight/Chapter 23 ~ Silver Nomination
Yo

Shoot I was really hoping I could do a ton of the Twilight subpages. There are a few spacing issues (first paragraph). Also, maybe link "rabbit", "cat", "badger", "camp", "medicine cat", "kits", "queen", and "Clan?" 21:24, April 21, 2016 (UTC)

Updated lol sorry, I did check to make sure no one(that is active) wrote it though. yay LeafXCrow

There are a lot of characters in the mentioned character list that actually appeared and should be in the minor characters list instead. 01:58 Sat Apr 23

Updated Sorry about that. I have a tendency to put characters as mentioned if they don't speak, or if the PoV cat just says something like, "(This cat) was across the clearing" or whatever

In the third paragraph, spell who's to whose. Also put a comma after "along with Crowfeather".

In the fifth paragraph, change "Leafpool says" to "Leafpool asks". Also, change "Leafpool replies that she is not- that she abandoned the Clan." to something like "Leafpool replies that she is not and that she abandoned the Clan." The last sentence in the same paragraph should read "Cinderpelt then dies from blood loss."

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Comments before vote? 15:30, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

The Ultimate Guide/Tallstar Speaks ~ Silver Nomination
So I didn't put quotes on the other TUG intros I wrote, and I haven't added one on this one either... Comments?

Yay WindClan! I think that WindClan and the Tribe would be mentioned, because I think that's what you did for other TUG chapters. Also, it seemed to me like there were some past-tense word, so you might want to read through the whole thing and check for it, since its a short summary. 23:19 Mon Apr 25

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Comments before vote? 15:30, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Hello, i would like to join Project Books as i think that it would nice to help a community that helped me. While i dont expect to be considered right away im willing do most topics for books that arent Ebooks or Mangas. The only mangas' ill do are from the super editions. Any other book or chapter is fine with me if you want me to edit it.

{Nosubst|User:MajesticCatsFromAbove/Sig}} 03:02, April 28, 2016 (UTC)MajesticCatsFromAbove

I'll add you in right now, make sure to read the rules, and next time please make a topic to join rather than putting it under someone's nomination. 15:30, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets/Chapter 10 ~ Silver Nomination
Meep.


 * In the 3rd paragraph, "He thinks that the prey is returning, since it was easier to hunt and the Clan was fully fed." The way its worded is a bit confusing, idk if its just me, but you might want to change it if you agree


 * In the 4th: "He breaks off, spinning around as Tigerclaw meows he had thing for get warrior to do if he's just gossiping with the queens." The 'thing for get warrior to do' part doesn't make sense, I'm guessing its just a typing mistake. 15:03 Sun May 1

June FA
Can't wait for school to be over, and also I need to lose weight for summer. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ So, what should June's FA be? I know it's a tad early, but eh. I was thinking Dovewing's Silence or Goosefeather's Curse. Comments? 15:30, May 1, 2016 (UTC)

I think either is fine. If I had to pick though I'd probably say DS because it came out a while ago. But again I'm fine with either of them. 15:34 Sun May 1

Yeah let's do DS