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Thornclaw (Alt. A) - For Approval
He has one for the kit, and the cite is real this time. I double-checked with some people in chat. Described as ginger. Comments? 19:04, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. 19:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color more ginger-y. He looks brown, and define the shading and highlights. 19:09, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And fix the earpink on both ears. The pink is covering little bits of lineart. 19:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink's match and redder 21:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I should know it's real, I added it. XD anyway, there's lighter ginger on his face, so maybe make the body that colour? Skt Spoilers... 22:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. You have barely any shading, there's no light source, there's miscoloured lineart, and I can hardly see the stripes. You have one week. 02:35, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

And just a warning, it's currently being discusses whether Brackenfur and Thornclaw's main description should be ginger, so this may end up being declined.... we'll have to wait and see for other's opinions on the discussion, but technically since they were first mentioned as ginger, it's quite likely they'll be changed. 05:56, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, why would it be declined? If it was changed, couldn't this just become the normal apprentice? Skt Spoilers... 06:02, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Not for sure. More likely that the normal apprentice would be tweaked, as it's an extremely simple tweak. Eh, I don't know, we'll decide when and if it happens. 11:12, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Euploadedray(Re-uploaded) Good? 12:06, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the fur more orange to match the kit better? 19:59, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and make the stripes match the kit. ^^ Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 22:42, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear, and then smudge it and make the color match the kit. Also define the shading. 05:14, 29, 06, 2012

Define the ear-pink  16:02, June 29,2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the ear. 16:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add eye depth. 16:46, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the kit? 14:32, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, Sky already said that. 14:44, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I thought Boss said Re-Uploaded after it. e.e 14:46, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Yes, I was caught in the east coast storm so I was left without cable for the past two days. And Re-uploaded.-- 18:01, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think that this about 80% done. Does anyone else agree? 18:31, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't count but, yes. Fill the earpink in more. 17:00, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

This looks pretty 80% to me; heading changed. Blur the shading tons, and make the colour and stripes match the kit. 17:03, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes match the other apprentice image? 00:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? ☯ ~ S t o n e c l a <font color="#6E6E6E" face="Comic Sans MS">w <font color="#523014" face="Comic Sans MS">~ <font color="#000000" face="Comic Sans MS">☯ 06:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but my dad put stupid restraints on the computer so I can only access it between 8 A.M.-8 P.M. for 1 hour. x.x-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:58, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on his ear. 13:02, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink more pink like the kit, and fill the earpink in the whole ear and then smudge/blur it. 15:01, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:33, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- 17:34, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes so it matches the kit? 17:36, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up into the ear. 21:14, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more and smoothen out the highlight on the haunch. 23:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I just realized I forgot to define the shading, so I'll do that now. x.x-- 13:34, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and thicken the stripes a tad. 20:15, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:48 Mon Jul 9

Blur the stripes just a bit?-- 02:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit too. 02:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll thicken the stripes when someone tells me how.-- 12:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Excuse me? You do know it's a privilege to be able to do this image. It's not your own personal right. You being rude and demanding for someone to tell you how to do something is only going to get this declined. You could've said, "I'm sorry, I don't know how, can someone help me?" and we'd be willing and glad. But now I'm debating on not helping you and letting you figure it out for yourself. If you don't understand me, just re-read what you've written and think about how extremely rude and degrading it is. 16:31, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And Boss, what you said was uncalled for. Part of making these images is doing them on your own. We're not going to tell you how to do something. e.e

Sorry. It's just been my life has been a bit hectic lately, so I've been in a more grumpy and demanding mood. My apologies to all that I may have offended.-- 13:05, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Ro) ~ For Approval
There's a cite for this, okay? x3 Anyways, Rainfur's rogue owo. Comments? 07:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

If there's a "cite for it", why is it not on his page? Didn't you think that before putting an image up, you should maybe confirm it should've been made in the first place? Just what I think. 07:43, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I did cite it. It's in his charcat box. 07:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I checked the cite. Rainfur was called a rogue. ^^;; Thicken and darken the stripes more to match the other images.

Wow. Ignore that. This is why Loonie shouldn't edit at 4 in the morning x.x Oh, and by the way: you can't just "re-sign" a post. Because now the time has changed so, apparently, I posted that comment before the image was even put up. 07:53, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I might need to blur them a tad more. 08:02, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes a bit more hard edge (I think that is the word xD) to match his other images? 15:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)T

he base pelt is too dark. Lighten up the pale markings so that we can actually see them. Smudge the markings a tad. I also don't believe I had a stripe going to the back of his head like that (goes to check to validate that) 16:15, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? I can barely see it. 20:50, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Still, make the stripes sharper, perhaps add more dapples to the back and lihgten the shading. 15:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is fine, but I think you lightened the base pelt too much. Also, lighten the stripes just a tad. 22:49, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:51, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and maybe tint it blue so it doesn't look like markings. 19:45, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes a bit more, but lighten the mottles. Breeze whisker  02:39, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The belly markings look like stripes. All I used for his markings was a burn circular brush. 03:17, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I lightened the shading a tad, too. 08:02, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

It's been awhile since anybody's commented, so CBA? Breeze whisker  00:58, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes just a smidge, then I'll continue the CBA.

River (Ro) ~ CBA
It's been a long time since I posted an image for approval. River<3 RiverClan's founder. 83 Anyways, it was decided that the founders of the Clans get rogue images. And here's River. See the PC talk page for more info. Also, I tinted the image's shading blue, because the leader seems to be tinted too, and I'd rather not change that. Comments? 19:42, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in his nose xD 22:05 Sun Jul 8

Bluuuuuuuue. Anyway, blur the shading on the middle area/belly/whatever and tail. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the base coat a smidge. Pretty. ^^ Breeze  whisker  02:38, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the base coat's fine. But could you darken the shading a tad? 00:35, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 06:25, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 09:43, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Wind (Ro) ~ CBA
I got the colors straight from Leggy, who made the leader image, so please don't ask me to change them. ^^;; Comments?

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit and blur the earpink. 22:38, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudging the ear pink is optional, and I'd rather not do it. It's fine.

When I did images in the past, I was told I had to do it. 23:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it's artist's choice. I don't know who told you that you have to do it, but you don't.

There's some waste by her head. (from highlights, it looks^) 00:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur where the shading meets the back/haunch highlights/lighter areas. And maybe expand the back highlight towards the neck a little. 01:34, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Darken the back highlight. 01:41, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

I quite like this image. :3 CBA? 02:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but could you define the shoulder highlight (or non-highlight) spot? And define the nose pink. 03:49, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't touch the nose because all the colors come //directly// from the file Leggy has. I asked her earlier for the colors.

Blur the shoulder-midriff and neck shading some. <span style="">06:38, 09, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded.

Continuing CBA? 16:27, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry there's this really dark spot on the shoulder that bugs me. Do you think you could blur/lighten that? Then I'll continue the CBA. 00:37, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

And CBA? 8D <span style="">06:49, 10, 07, 2012

Shadow (Ro) - CBA
Blech. -not too confident it matches- Comments? 20:05, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can blur her shading/highlights and maybe darken her? I luff this 8D 20:08 Sun Jul 8

Re-uploaded. That stomach highlight... -twitches- 20:12, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darkern her a leedle bit more. 21:48, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the eye values a tad more? 00:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jack, if I darken her then she definitely won't match. 04:10, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it. <span style="">06:42, 09, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded. 07:10, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be blurred more. And maybe darken the ear-pink. It looks to light for a black cat, but that´s just me. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   16:57, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine. -- 17:02, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

It matches her leader. 18:26, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the flank highlight a bit~ 00:36, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading. 18:24, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a little bit. Or blur it. Breeze whisker  18:25, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:29, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?

Thunder (Ro) - For Approval
Bleh. e.e I'm going away for practically 2 weeks after Tuesday, so if this isn't approved before then (which it won't) I'm giving it to Icy. Second image that I had to copy stripes from Roo xD Comments? 21:50, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and darken the shading. Define the earpink as well. 22:02, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

I really wanted this, so I'll become a warrior. Anyways, define the earpink a bit, it's kinda hard to see. 23:09, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink matches the other images, so it's fine.

Y u steal my reservation D:< Anyways, make the paws whiter and define the shading. Good job <3 01:16, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' pfft. you'll get this Tueday. 01:58, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and lighten up the shoulder and haunch so they look like they stick out. Breeze whisker  02:37, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pelt color and make the stripes... match more and more wavy xD <span style="">06:54, 09, 07, 2012 I don't want to leave this up for two weeks untouched. I get back Saturday night, but I have to leave again for a week on Sunday. This needs to get approved as fast as possible, and I promised I'd give it to Icy. So Icy, you may now takeover. 02:36, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Splook I love you dear. Anyways, redid it, cause if I got the xcf from Splook, my computer would probably explode. Roo matching your image...Why do your skills have to be so brilliant? 'Kay, comments? 02:44, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. Lovely~ 18:32, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thank you. 20:14, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

thicken the stripes a bit -- 20:57, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

They match the leader. 21:04, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Elo's right. Thicken them just a tad.

And lighten them. And the base coat. Also, make the shading conform to the bod more, it doesn't make much sense right now. 23:49, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Shading on ginger cats...Comments would be very much appreciated at the moment. 00:01, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the paw shading a bit~ 04:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar(Lo)-For Approval
I'm not really sure how an auto-decline works.... sorry if I've done something wrong. Comments? Changes aren't showing, but pretty much all I did was erase the waste. 16:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The eye color looks like cream. 16:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in the white pixels. 16:35, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please try and make it match? The stripes are still off, and the cream is the wrong colour and in a different spot on her face than the leader. 16:38, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well, she's facing a different way than the rogue and queen, and most of the leader is the other side of her. 16:40, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

If your having troubles with the colors just try to take them from one of her other images. Just because she´s facing the other way I still think the stripes should be the same. But that could also be the artists opinion... Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave!  17:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not change them. 17:10, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, fixed the cream and teh eyes. 17:21, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and get rid of the waste. 18:09, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes need to match. It doesn't matter what direction they're coming from, Storm. =.=;;

Reuploaded. Copied stripes to the best of my abilities... 19:50, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all over the image. 19:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and smudge them just a tad..

Reuploaded, blurred stripes and cleared...some waste. I'll get the rest soon. 20:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and there should be some y-stripes in there. 21:00, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

What art program do you use? I can give you a tip that will get rid of all the waste with just a click of a button in GIMP! 00:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I used Pixlr for this but I have GIMP. Thanks, Ivy! 01:48, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ears, added Y stripes and filled in white pixles, comments? 03:23, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad, and make them a tiny bit more rippley - like the leader. Also, they look tintet green... Could you fix that? Also, redden the earpink, erase the waste, and darken the shading a tad. =3 05:12, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm waiting until my sister's computer's out of the shop (Tuesday, around this time) because her GIMP doesn't close on me everytime. I got everything but the waste, whcih I promise to erase tomorrow. 05:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hm... I think I erased it all. Just seeing what I can do before I'm allowed to use GIMP. 14:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I didn't reply sooner :S On your lineart layer, select the region on the outside of the lineart. Keep your selection, then go on the shading layer. Go to the settings at the top. Edit---> clear. It should clear out all waste. Then go to Select---> none. 16:41, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivy =) 17:03, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

ass more stripes and define the shading. 20:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

BAHAHAHHAHAHHZAHAHAHHAHA Ok I'm done xD...BBAHAHAHAHAH Make some of the stripes on the haunch y stripes too. 21:03 Tue Jul 10

There's a little bit of waste under the front left paw. Breeze whisker  01:00, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Lo) ~ For Approval
Here she is. owo Turns out, Clovertail //does// get a loner image, and you can see the discussion on PC's talk page. I took all the colors from her warrior image, so I'd rather not change them. First GIMP image for Warriors Wiki owo Comments? 19:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Re-Ups^ 19:47, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear-pink. Darken it or redden it. And anyway it doesn´t really match the other images. Also blur the belly shading and darken the tail shading. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   21:15, July 10, 2012 (UTC)