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Stormkit (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Ok, I know I put 2 images on, but I couldn't decide if she was mostly gray or mostly ginger, so I put them both on, and I'll let you decide which one's better. Comments?Bluestar11796 00:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

First, don't make this a gallery, and don't make it a thumbnail either. Whichever one you choose, which I think the first is better, blur the patches, and define the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:11, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, but when I tried to put them on separately, the first image disapeared, that's the only reason I put them in the gallery. But, it's fixed.Bluestar11796 23:40, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I say go with the second one, but make the gray lighter, since in the graphic novel it appears to be a very light, almost white, gray. 23:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you need to change it to the proper eye color. Her eyes are amber, not brown. 23:45, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

There, fixed it for you x) Tone down the ginger, looks too bright :\ and blend/smudge the grey and ginger together. -- 23:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you're going with the second one - The lineart looks a little blurry, though it may change. Blur/smudge the patches and blur the stripes. Also, redden the earpink some and define the shading :3

If you're going with the first one - Blur the stripes, smudge the patches, redden the earpink and define shading/highlights. 23:48, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Who is working on this, no one signed. If you go with the first one, make the gray look less...weird, maybe make her paler ginger, and paler gray? and tone tone the gray down? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:18, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me, i forget that quite often.Bluestar11796 00:24, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I had always thought of her as more of a Sandstorm color. 01:04, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Not to be mean, but I don't think this is how she was depicted in the book. Let my check my copy of TR and see which one she is again 02:02, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

go to google images and look at a picture of a ginger and gray cat, they mostly have a sandstorm color of ginger. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

U mean leik this? -- 02:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded (or more like re-done). I made the ginger more like on Sandstorm's charart, and I really like the first one, but, its up to you.Bluestar11796 03:21, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kay, now make the gray a bit lighter and the ginger part a bit more ginger (they look tan now :\) -- 03:26, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and go with the second one. The first one is awesome but it's not how she was depicted in the book 14:51, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be blurred on the ginger patches. 16:10, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I decided: Gray with ginger patches (even though I think that the mostly ginger one is cool), so,''' Re-uploaded. Bluestar11796 16:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading is too dark. Please fix it. I love the patches, btw. Good job! 16:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the stripes on the paws, it looks to unreal. other than that, great job^^ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:52, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger patches larger on the body, add shading on the tail, make the earpink redder, blur the stripes, along with the shading. Nice work 17:07, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights, and define the earpink. `

Reuploaded. changes not showing.Bluestar11796 19:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 21:59, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur lighting, I see circles there. Leaf-storm,7:35,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Instead of completely getting rid of the paw stripes, I say you make them horizontal instead of vertical. But that's just me. 14:26, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gray and ginger.... huh, is that ever possible? XD Anyways, this looks GREAT, but the shading seems a bit funky, like it's got two different shadings, one for the gray, and one for the ginger, it doesn't look all the same, if that made any sense. XD It's like, it's shaded in different places on the ginger than on the gray. Any way of fixing that? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:06, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:52, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

@Paleclaw, Well, it HAS to be otherwise, she wouldn't be Gray and ginger, nor my cat's kit, Spots xD This looks great, blur the highliths a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:59, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should make it look like a dilute tortoiseshell, which is like a cream or pale ginger and gray. It makes more sense if you ask me. xP 20:18, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I know you're not supposed to use the cover images but on that one it has a lighter gray, maybe that would make it look more natural Wild  fire Hazelx Thorn!  00:16, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

That's not really what a dilute tortie looks like. Basically they are a gray tabby with light patches of cream. Right now the ginger is too bright. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 06:36, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is a tad off-topic, but maybe she's a torbie (tabby-tortie mix), that could be possible. 13:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be a bit more solid looking. 21:40, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been uploaded for a week. Are you still working on this? 22:28, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm still working on it, but I started high school almost a week ago, so I can't work on it much. I'm at school right now!Bluestar11796 16:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but try to work as much as you can, or else this might get withdrawn for lack of work. 22:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 01:10, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it as well. 01:52, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This should be declined, as the picture hasn't been updated in over a week. Nothing against the user, but I do believe those are the rules. 04:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, they are. I think someone can take over now, or this will be archived. 23:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

A lead needs to decline this, I would change the heading but I do not believed that I am allowed. 14:44, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Um...could I take over? I would love to! 20:06, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, if you're not doing Tigerheart anymore 20:28, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

^^ Thankies I'll get working on it ASAP I'm probally gonna redo most of it.... 23:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded bleh meh no like this. But comments? 00:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gray and ginger meet. 00:15, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluredafyed? 00:18, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a gray nose 00:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Never knew that....

Tone down the earpink, blur it, and smudge the ginger into the gray more. Yo, Sandstorm, mind if I ask you a question? -- 01:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I can only be one for a minute so shoot. What's your question? 01:45, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger; and darken the shading. 04:21, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's on the second file page. Thanks for all of the comments :3 15:34, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ginger patches; they look a bit too golden. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 20:41, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Wow it does look better now I really like this

Darken the shading. 00:34, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches in the direction of the fur, to give it some sort of texture. 01:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bleh tryed my best with the smudging but, bleh 12:57, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink; it looks blotchy. Also, darken the shading. 00:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it look more like the Stormkit from After The Flood's manga pic. (i really do love stormkit) So make the stripes in the place like the manga and lighten the gray so it's sort of like a pale gray because in the manga it's shown to be an extremly light gray. 11:35, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I havn't done it in a while school started >_< But I will still be able to work on this ^^ 21:06, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the patches and the stripes more. 22:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah i looked at my manga book and noticed that it has part of the tail tabby so....I did that :P 01:21, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the gray parts. This is cool, I like it SpottedtalonMudears 03:42, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thankies ^^ But I really do hope this will get approved I think it's turning out good so far! 22:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, redden the earpink. Most common comments ever. xD 00:03, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But it's good! For me at least xD 19:50, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches and stripes a bit more. I really like this! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah thanks and I can't blur no more than this :P 14:30, September 11, 2011 (UTC) well the patches still need to be blurred some more. 20:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Just to clarify, we don't mean that the stripes in the patches need blurring, but that the patches need to be blurred into the gray. Once that is done, I'll consider it perfect. 21:52, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Like smudging the patches intop the gray? I'm confuised.... 23:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

If she meant smudging or not, I think it would look really good with smudges, so I think you should do so. 01:16, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes smudge into the gray. For example, look down at the Mapleshade at the bottom of this page. All of her patches are smudged together. Try that, but on a smaller scale. Just blend the patches gently into the gray at the edges so they look soft, not sharp. 01:28, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I hope its better now..... 12:44, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, make the patches reddish so it looks like the manga and get rid of the stripes on the patches so it matches. (im very strict on that cuz i <3 stormkit) 13:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

All ginger cats have stripes. That's the rule in this wiki and in life. That the artist of the graphic novel doesn't know much about cat genetics isn't our problem. And I personally think the color is fine, but do what you want. 17:14, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Had a few oppinions and Imma keep it like this. and I do agree with you Shellheart ^^ 20:52, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the ginger meets the white and I think this'll be ready. 16:38, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Not trying to disagree or anything but I REALLY think that the patches should be redder. (please dont yell at me *cowers in fear* 19:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The ginger is fine as it is :). Thicken the shading. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:21, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur it a tad. We don't copy the exact styles seen in the manga. Not sure why though. 21:24, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I blured and darkened the shading. But blur what white? That doesn't make sense... 23:06, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I meant ginger and gray, sorry. I am so scatterbrained... >.>;; 23:10, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I did that and smudged it ever so slightly.... 00:03, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. Reuploaded Dones I luv this ^^ 00:28, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (W) ~ CBA
Here she is! What do you think? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:40, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink and change the side the highlights are on, on the tail. 01:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes more orange, less yellow. Rename the image Graypool.warrior.png. 01:53, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurred earpink, changed eye and highlights, renamed image. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 02:32, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading on her neck and right by her shoulder more 02:39, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurring job is a fail, but I tried. ^.^ Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  02:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good job ^_^ Add more highlights to the upper part of the tail, though. 02:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This looks EPIC Shady! xD Brighten the tail highlight ;) şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  13:17, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading just a tad. Looks good otherwise, Shadeh! 16:47, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit blotchy; blur it and smoothen it; define the light source, add more shading to the tail, and blur the earpink. Great work! 17:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Got it. What's the light source? (This is my first charart, sorry). Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 17:45, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Gosh i know what it is but i am HORRID at explaining things....so i can't help you, I'm sorry DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 17:48, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - The blurring was a fail. I tried. And it's fine Maplepool. xD Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  17:55, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The changes aren't showing. Help? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 17:58, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If the changes don't show, there's nothing you can do about it. Just look at the second-to-top file on the file page. The changes always start to show after a few days, don't worry. :D The light source means where the light is coming from; for example, if the light is coming from the side of the cat, the highlights would all be on the side; if the light is coming from the front, the back would be darker than the front. Hope this helps. =) 20:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a million. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 21:22, August 17, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Changes still aren't showing. Defined light source. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 14:35, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Their is some blurred lineart near the shoulder. şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  19:43, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think the blurred lineart goes down the back, also. 20:05, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, I see. I'll get that cleared up, but I don't if the changes will show...thanks though. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 22:17, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Um I fixed the shoulder lineart, but I didn't see any blurred pixels on the back. Changes are finally showing! xD Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  22:43, August 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink looks like it's a little off to the right. Either redo the earpink, or just expand it to go towards the left more. 23:25, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Complete FAIL. Oh well, I tried. And of course the changes aren't showing again! :3 Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  00:07, August 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright, the changes are showing again! The earpink is a fail. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and highlights. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:42, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Uhh, I don't think the changes are showing again, but I can't tell. Does it look any different? (Sorry, I'm so stupid sometimes). Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:07, August 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I have no clue xD. Er... blur the earpink some more. Gawjus, Shadeh! şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  00:40, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurred earpink. It's not that great, Snowy, but I did my best. :) Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  00:54, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there is a gray stripe on the back, get rid of that and blur the earpink a bit more. Also, there is some blurred lineart on the tail, and it may be just me, but the top of the lineart on the tail looks a bit lighter. Otherwise, nice job. 17:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed. Changes aren't showing again. =( Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  22:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Alright I think the changes are showing now. :D Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  13:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading is too dark on the back and the....front part of the cat. I think you can fix it ;) 15:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I completely re-did her. The shading on the old one was disastrous, I couldn't get it to lighten. Comments? Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 19:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better Shadeh. Blur the tail shading and the earpink. :3 şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  23:00, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and highlights. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:17, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit and the highlights. 21:44, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight bigger. 22:23, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Fixed. 12:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink. 23:59, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. 13:57, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Enlarge the ear-pink a bit more and darken it. Blur the shading on the tail and around the highlights; maybe darken the highlights a bit. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:11, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to bright. And make the original color be seen, not just the shading and highlights. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  01:04, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on this, I'm so busy! XC 21:08, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I might redo this again if I have to. Comments? Changes aren't showing. 20:38, August 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the highlights and the shading. 01:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I blurred highlights and shading, re-did earpink and tail. Changes aren't showing. 13:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think it's a good time to mention that the top file on the file page is the new version. The first smaller one in the blue table. Sorry, guys. :p 00:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Redden the earpink. 00:54, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes still aren't showing. 03:02, September 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Something's wrong. I typed in a link for the full size image, and now it's taking me to a page with the name of the link. Can someone help? 03:06, September 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I tried it, and it worked fine. Are you sure you typed it correctly? Also name this Graypool.warrior.png. 23:33, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Changes are showing. 00:17, September 2, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink easier to see by making it more solid and a bit brighter. ` 00:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

And dull the highlights a little bit. 17:50, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading under the chin. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:42, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on this, I'm just really busy!! I'll upload the new version ASAP. 20:54, September 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading on the back is WAY too dark and the ear pink needs to be smaller 22:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Okay, I officially suck at chararts. Added shading, dulled highlights, and made earpink smaller and brighter. 14:28, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Center the ear pink and ill CBA this. 03:32, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes aren't showing, and the file page isn't showing the changes either. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 16:32, September 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink more triangular. 00:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the highlights. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:57, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Dull the highlights a bit and redden the ear-pink. 03:53, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could someone help me with dulling the highlights? I'm not exactly sure what to do.... Shadewing  Blades of the Night 14:41, September 11, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I can help. 18:23, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 03:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Blur the earpink. 06:55, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I will do that. Thank you so much Atelda!!! Shadewing  Blades of the Night 19:15, September 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The ear pink is fine. CBA? 23:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) For Approval
Here's Rainflower. Any suggestions? 19:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It appears you didn't use the correctly sized base, and this should have been put below Blackstar. You're going to have to redo this in the right sized base. 19:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC) This is good but yesh, I'm afraid you will have to redo this. ;) Shadewing  Mischief Managed...  19:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

'''sorry but what is the right sized base? 19:44, August 22, 2011 (UTC)'''

http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Warriorlongf.gif 19:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

oh sorry i see it now. thanx 19:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploded wiith the right base I don't think the changes are showing yet. Comments? 20:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The changes showed up comments? 21:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is white. Make her a light gray, or just take the colors from the queen image I have up for approval. Also, rename this Rainflower.warrior.png <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  21:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is smudged all around, define the black in the eye, thicken and darken the shading, and define the highlight on the tail. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

You should give her a pupil, for starters... 23:40, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

ok and snow it is light gray. it isn't white!? 23:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I dont know if the changes show but now she's as close to the color on her queen image as i can get. i think her lineart is not as smudged, i put a pupil but i don't know if it shows. Also how to i rename her? Comments? 00:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Much better Lion! Um, I still don't see a pupil in the eye. If you go to Firepelt's tutorial, you should be able to find the eye design. Also, the earpink looks a bit odd, make it a more natural color. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:21, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better! (holy cow I didn't know Shadewing was gonna say that...) Blur the highlights on her shoulder and haunch 00:23, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok. i'll try. ummmmmm how do i rename her. 13:17, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reupload it, but before you do, there will be a box with a "more options", choose this and you can rename the old file. I will mark the wrong file for deletion so it can be deleted and yours will have the right name 13:27, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok thank you 18:14, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

when i try to reupload it, it just goes back to a blank reupload page. can someone tell me why it's doing this ? And i don't think i can change the name. I couldn't find the button. sorry 18:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'll rename it. 21:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Renamed. The changes might not be showing yet, so give it some time. 21:47, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

thank you! 00:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 01:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

ok 13:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, and also blur the earpink. :p 15:07, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded i dont know if the changes show. 21:29, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and the earpink. Maybe perhaps you should redden the earpink a bit 22:42, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

i reuploaded it so it may not show the changes but i'll do it again and i tried reder earpink but it just looks wierd. 22:53, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Its too light. Take the color from her queen image. 23:27, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did mistystar 13:53, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Then why is it too light? 15:36, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

i don't know maybe i did it wrong. i'll try to make it a little darker. 20:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

The color is better now, but the shading should blend into the pelt more. Try either making the highlights bigger, or blurring it a lot. 23:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know if it looks any better 23:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Um, there are white pixels surrounding the eye. Also, the eye still needs a pupil and all. 14:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

i did put a pupil and i don't know about the white pixles let me fix that. 16:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. fixed the white pixles and there has been a pupil. 16:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, fix the eye (Look at Nightshine's tutorial on how to do eyes), and smoothen the pelt. 22:59, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

What exactly do you mean by smoothen the pelt? 23:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Fixed the eye and earpink but i don't know what smoothen the pelt means sorry. 00:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, nice job Lion! Blur ze chest highlights. xD. 21:03, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

As Shadewing said, blur the tail highlight. But the other two are really sloppy, no offense, and blurring would make them inconsistent. Make them like the tail and face highlights. Also, she's pale gray, not white. Add shading or darken it. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 22:02, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

there i shading. i think and none taken. i'll try anyway. 23:16, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think it looks any better. 23:22, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights stick out, and the earpink is too pink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 23:53, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

She looks white right now, darken the whole thing a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:43, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I Don't think the changes are showing.

She still looks white. Try to make her pelt colour darker. Stoneclaw33 09:37, August 28, 2011

I made her darker i think the changes will show up in a while. 17:11, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think the changes are showing. I made her darker. 19:15, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can I make the picture from another time become the picture that shows up on this page? Because i upload it but it just goes back to the original picture. Can someone help me?? 19:23, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Calm down. The changes just aren't showing. Give it some time, and they'll show up. We just have too many images on this wiki.... 00:53, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shade of gray; it looks like she's a white cat. Darken the ear-pink as well. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:06, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

ok thank you. 19:12, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I fixed her. She is darker, Fixed earpink and highlights. Changes aren't showing yet. 13:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty good. She looks much better now.I think the shading on her back needs to blurred a little more Stoneclaw33 12:42 August 30 2011

ok. 20:26, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I don't think the changes are showing. 21:22, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink; it looks too neon. 00:48, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Changes aren't showing though. 17:24, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job for your first charart Cind! ^-^ 20:30, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. awwwww thanx snowy. 21:36, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 23:41, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think it looks better though. 00:09, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

highlightes are odd have you looked at a tutorial? That could help. And the ear pink is too bright and blur it. 17:19, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. changes aren't showing yet. 21:05, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink not so hot-pink and brighten the eyes a bit. Also, maybe darken the main fur color just a bit more? Still looks white to me. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Changes aren't showing. 22:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink just a tad more. 01:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'changes aren't showing yet. 20:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

So is this image approved? 00:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, it was never CBAed, this looks lovely, Only thing, darken the ear-pink, it looks to neon.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:40, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ummmm what's CBA? Sorry i'm new. I'll try. thanx. 00:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and the shading, please. 04:19, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

earpink look way too neon..and define the shading & add some shading to the right ear x) -- 04:30, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ok and what is CBAed? Thanx 12:44, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The head is way too white, and the shading is blotchy. I suggest you re-do the shading and pick a different lighter and more natural color for the earpink. 14:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

CBA=Comments Before Approval. Take the ear-pink from Sunfish's warrior image, or Ferncloud's warrior image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

ok just gimme some time. 02:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

sorry guys my computer is having some problems they'll get fixed in about maybe 24 hrs. I'm sorry once it starts working i'll work on the image, wait it won't get declined because of this will it? 18:59, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, unless you're gone for over a week, this will be fine. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

When you come back, lighten the ear-pink, make it smaller, and blur it. Darken the shading and define the light source. 03:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

great! and thanx guys. 17:22, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'I think this one is the best so far ^^ 23:51, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, make it look smooth. 06:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. ' 23:34, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shade the feet farthest from us. 02:49, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, blur the highlights, add/brighten the face highlight, and the earpink is too pink. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:19, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights. 00:09, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (Q) - For Approval
It's my first in a while. On her page it didn't have an eye color so I chose a random one. Hope it looks good! Comments? Moon 20:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Darken the shading on the back. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  20:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tabby stripes on her face, make the earpink bigger, and to be honest, the eye color blend in with the pelt, but that's just a personal preference. 21:13, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The eye color looks fine to me Ivystripe. Redden the earpink and darken the shading on the white. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:08, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

You need to maek her long-haired, it says all Riverclan cats have thick fur. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have too, not all the RiverClan cats are long-haired (Reedwhisker and Graymist as examples. Define/darken the nose color. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

We are going to tweak them later, we are thinking to make all Riverclan cats long-furred. Scroll down ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:39, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I didn't see that. My whole mind's a blur today... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:42, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! I think there's some shading waste or something around her tail. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:33, August 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make it a longhair, and define the earpink. 17:43, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I will get to this as soon as I can, sorry started school and I am really busy with soccer and school. If I have to do it completely over I will try and get it by tomorrow. Thanks. Moo  nstr   ike  04:37, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. 22:45, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 23:34, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is a thin line sticking out of the tabby patch on the tail tip. 03:13, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Moon! *tacklehug* I've missed you. Darken the shading on the white, but overall beautiful! 23:24, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wait should I redo it or what? Make it long haired or what? I am confused... Some people say it looks good this way others say to redo it. Moo  nstr   ike  02:54, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, all RiverClan cats are being done as long hairs unless specified as otherwise. Sorry, you'll have to redo it. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:02, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Um, enlarge the earpink. 13:56, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I see that Moonpelt Isn't doing anything with it Leaf-storm,19:53,August 29,2011 (UTC)

Give her time, it's only been a day. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it and define the earpink. 00:46, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a lot more than a few days, it was last updated August 22. 17:14, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

It had been three days. Give her time. 17:23, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I was looking on the upload page. Sorry. 17:24, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, you don't have to re-do it. For my Skyheart image, I simply put the longhaired image as a layer over mine, and erased all of the lineart of the shorthair. The tail will be re-done, though. This can be frustrating, so you don't have to use this method. I think I remember Ivystripe explaining this, so you could ask her for details. 20:08, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over this cat ..I already made longhaired version..If you allow it.. Leaf-storm,15:09,September 3,2011 (UTC)

Go ahead & take over, it hasnt been updated in over a week.. >_> -- 15:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can I? Thanks! Ok, first I reupload it as longhaired..it needs some changes, say what do you think? Leaf-storm,16:22,September 3,2011 (UTC)

Oh, It's not showing! Leaf-storm,16:23,September 3,2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry... I've been very busy. Moo  nstr   ike  20:54, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Moonstrike, but Leafstrom already took over, if you take a image, you need to work on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:27, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and rename it Softwing.queen.png. 04:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Difine the earpink and make it more red.Moonstorm88 10:15, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Renamed only..I do other things later. Leaf-storm,12:33,September 5,2011 (UTC)

Oh, at last I'm home..Ok I reuploaded it now, I don't know if changes are showing Leaf-storm,16:58,September 5,2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. 18:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I made new stripes and add some more shadings..Leaf-storm,18:25,September 7,2011 (UTC)

I bow down to your stripes. blur them sliiightly & define the shading -- 22:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded .Leaf-storm,18:35,September 8,2011 (UTC)

This is beautfiul :3 Except I feel that patches's coloring should be more on the brown side. You don't have to change it unless others agree. 21:44, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, blur the shaidng. I agree with Silvereye. 00:14, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,9:06,September 10,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white. It's really blotchy. 02:08, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,10:37,September 11,2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes more tabbier. I don't know if that helps much. 07:05, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:37,September 13,2011 (UTC)

There might be some blurred lineart by the haunch, but I'm not sure. Define the shading a tad, please :3  00:15, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, and make the earpink more triangular. 00:16, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Q) - For Approval
I added her yesterday, but somehow she was deleted. :P Anyway I know it sucks! <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. It doesn't match her other chararts, so get the colors off of them. 18:04, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also, isn't this more than the page limit? 18:09, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, and she needs a gray nose. 18:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is over the limit of 35. 19:12, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's not now, and the others should have been archived. 20:25, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

blur the stripes more -- 00:06, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and enlarge it a bit more. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 13:49, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing though.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:46, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I redid her stripes, blured the shading, and changed her colors to match her other chararts. I can see some white dots, but I colored those in, hang on I'm still editing her.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay fixed the white dots, but the changes arn't showing :P<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Now the changes are showing. Yay! I also blurred the ear-pink a little more. Hope it gets approved soon!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 20:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, blur the earpink more, and lighten the highlights. 20:56, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might not show.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the stripes and the earpink and the shading. You should redden the earpink too. 22:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

And it needs to match her other chararts. It has too many stripes. 23:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might show. I'm not sure. It looks like they are not showing. I removed some stripes, and blurred everything.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 03:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are not showing!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 15:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay changes are showing, a little.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 15:23, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more. 22:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I added a gray nose, blurred the stripes, and removed some black smudge around her tail.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:46, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Willowbreeze.queen.png, and remove a few more stripes. 23:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try, but there are other willobreeze.queen images.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 01:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Then overwrite the images :] 15:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But the previous image always shows up, but I'll try!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:27, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I canged the name to Willowbreeze.queen.png, and removed a little more stripes. Hope it gets approved!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur ze highlights, especially tail and haunch. 21:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She looks a little dark compared to her Warrior image. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 00:30, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Her warrior image was not apporved yet. I copied her colors from her kit, and apprentice pics.Also, I won't be on start after this, not until tommorrow.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 02:06, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, there's a white pixel on the front right (our right) paw. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 12:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes aren't showing. :P I fixed the white on the paw.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:33, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more and round it; it looks a bit flat. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:00, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading a bit more, and blured it. Hope it gets approved!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 21:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't everyone? xD Lighten the highlights a bit, and blur them. 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing now.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 17:29, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back highlight a lot. 23:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur the highliht on her belly and left front leg, blur the earpink a bit. This looks friggin awesome by the way 8D -- 01:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thank you! I blured the earpink, and the highlights.Also, I darkened the shading, just tell me to lighten it if it's too dark.:D PS. The changes might not show. :P<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 22:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, blur the front left leg and belly highlight more, make it look smooth like the tail & haunch x3 -- 22:33, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the changes are now showing! I'm gonna re-upload it now.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 00:44, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes arn't showing. But i smudged the highlights.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 01:01, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

heheh, your gonna hate meh for saying this but blurr/smudge them some more xD Oh, and darken the very bottom of her belly and chest shading -- 03:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes are still not showing! It looks way better than this.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 04:57, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 04:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur / smudge the stripes into the pelt and make the whole thing lighter.Moonstorm88 10:19, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make what lighter? Her pelt colors?<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 16:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moonstorm, sorry but the stripes should not be smudged into the pelt, because it won't match the other images. 00:07, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes are not showing!!<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 13:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now the changes are showing. So, should I smudge in the stripes? Or leave them? :| <font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 19:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is coming along nicely! Also, do not darken the whole thing like moonstorm said. It's supposed to match the others x) Anyways, blur the front legs and back highlights(heheh..) and did you add the darker shading to the very bottom of the stomach & chest liek I told you to? I dont see any .-. -- 21:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:02, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing. I lightened the shading a bit, and added the darker shading like Blue said, (hehe) and blurred the highlights a little. Though, I won't be on during this weekend, :P so yea, I might be on, or not.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 03:13, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her stomache needs to be blurred a lot. This is looking great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But somehow the changes are still not showing! Just wait till' the changes show.<font color="#FFE600">Moon <font color="#0276FD">stream 16:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

She was mentioned to have the same forehead markings as Silverstream in CP. I think the charart should reflect that. Otherwise, beautiful. 20:39, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the front paw and back.` 22:59, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (W) ~ CBA


Now that Shellheart is done, on to Sunfish. And, for the record, I have Darkhallows' permission to do this. I just couldn't decide on whether or not to make her default brown or gray to match the "manga", and it was suggested I do gray. Not sure if I should darken it, but she appeared to be a very light gray anyway. I made her eyes amber because her name made me think that that would be the correct color. Comments? 20:25, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and smooth out the shading; it looks a bit blotchy. Darken the ear-pink. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:34, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the pelt colour ever so slightly? It seems too pale. 20:43, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, darken the shading, lighten the highlights. 21:11, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reffen the earpink and define it and the shading too. 22:50, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I mean redden. Sorry. 22:52, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded changes not showing. Did all suggested above, only darkened her pelt an iota because she really looks pale in the "manga". 03:38, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make her long-furred, as all riverclan cats have a thick pelt. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, make it longhaired, and darken the shading. 22:22, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

In the image from which I took her description, she was short furred. I'm leaving it as is, since it was the general agreement that we'd only make them long-haired if they were never described or seen as short haired. I will darken the shading, though. 00:30, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. In manga, you can hardly tell how long the fur is. You never know, maybe she's jus really skinny with lots of thick fur. 00:36, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. In any case, her description is 'slender', and that typically translates to short-furred. 00:51, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Not all the time, my cat, Flash is selnder, but she has long fur, and look at Poppyfrost; slender it says she's SLENDER, but her pixlis have long fur. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:48, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine. If everyone insists, I'll redo her with long fur. 02:57, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Erf. There's a random slash of highlight on the shoulder, which looks like the only highlight, and a random dade on the closer back paw. Ginger <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#FF6103"> Heat wave <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#4DBD33"> + Power outage <sup style="font-family:Comic Sans;color:#1D7CF2"> = Unhappy Ginger  19:09, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. Changes not showing. She's now long haired, as per popular demand. 15:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

You know, if she's called SUNfish, don't you think she'd be like a really pale gold? 16:19, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

That would be too presumptuous. Darkhallows advised me to make her gray to match th eonly decription we'll probably ever have of her from the manga at the end of Crookedstar's Promise. And we can't go by names for descriptions. Have you seen Tawnyspots? How he got that name is an enigma. 16:52, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart near the tip of the earpink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:26, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see it, but whatever it is it isn't blurred lineart. I don't touch the lineart, I work under it. 20:13, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and round it; it looks a bit flat. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:44, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading tons except on the tail-- 03:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks darker than the rest of the body. Lighten it a bit. 13:59, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the shadking thicker. 15:06, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is a little too blured on one side but other than that great job! 20:52, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the highlights. 00:42, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did all suggested above (though most of it was the same thing repeated over and over again by different people), basically redid the shading completely. Still think she looked like a short furred cat in the graphic novel, but I digress. 01:19, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better! Blur the neck and back shading. 22:35, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, changes not showing yet. Blurred it literally as much as it would go. Anything else? 22:56, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if its my computer, but the base of the tail seems to have some waste near it. Also, lighten the front paw. 00:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, got rid of any waste I could find, lightened front paw. Changes not showing yet. 16:22, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights on the muzzle, it almost makes it look like she has a graying muzzle. This is looking great! ^^ Keep up the good work! :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

It looks like there's some black or dark gray mixed with the ear-pink. Blur the shading around the head and darken/add some shading under the chin. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:08, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened shading under the chin more (though I'm betting another user gets on to tell me to lighten it again) and got rid of the shading in the ear. 20:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more triangular. 23:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:09, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight and the shading under the chin. 18:08, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Honestly, I've pushed that shading as far as it will go. 23:42, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's a few bits of waste around the whole image. 02:41, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Even out the shading on her back and blur the shading around the head. 03:22, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud, could you circle the waste? I can't see it no matter what I try. 17:33, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Gaiz..shading is fine, just make the earpink triangular, desaturate it a bit, and THEN it'll look prefectly fine to me -- 04:27, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've literally done everything that's been suggested, even if the suggestions have contradicted eachother. Got rid of any shading waste I could squint at. Fixed the ear-pink. Re-uploaded. 11:33, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'm going to be gone until Sunday night. Heading home to celebrate my dad's birthday and leaving my computer here in my dorm. Ta till then. 18:21, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'm back. Is there anything else needing done? 20:27, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can find nothing wrong with this, Shelly. CBA? 01:05, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but from my perspetive the neck looks messy. 07:08, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Good eye, Robintalon. I didn't catch that. Fix that, then I'll reinstate the CBA. 07:10, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the neck. Changes not showing here. 16:31, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, about forgetting, Shelly. CBA? 16:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, except on the tail. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:12, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine and other users agree. It's at max opacity and I've blurred it to death. This charart is fine. Someone please re-instate the CBA.

It looks just fine, Mintstarr. Continuing CBA from where it left off. 21:31, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Minnowkit (CP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
First Image! Excited! Anyway, it didn't mention her eye color, so I made it blue. Any comments?

Darken the shading tons, please. It seems there isn't any there. 04:24, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Not sure if the changes are showing yet and I'm not sure if I darkened it enough. I darkened it, though!

<font color="#66ffff">The Stars Align <font color="#66ccff">Twilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO! <font color="#bebebe">Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango* <font color="#bebebe"><font color="#66ccff">Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 04:51, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye highlights on the same side on both eyes so she doesn't look cross eyed. --Frosted Apple 10:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed Eye Highlights. (Not sure if changes are showing, yet.)

<font color="#66ffff">The Stars Align <font color="#66ccff">Twilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO! <font color="#bebebe">Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango* <font color="#bebebe"><font color="#66ccff">Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 15:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink, darken the shading, brighten the highlights; the shading looks a bit flat. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:22, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Lightened the ear-pink, darkened the shading, brightened the highlights. Not sure if changes are showing, yet!

<font color="#66ffff">The Stars Align <font color="#66ccff">Twilight: Gimme a Mango...NAO! <font color="#bebebe">Random Person: Uh...Okai! *Gives a Mango* <font color="#bebebe"><font color="#66ccff">Twilight:YAY! *Huggiez Mango* 16:12, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! The earpink on this -> side looks darker than the other one. 20:18, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eye color a tad, looks great ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:06, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, and blur the chest highlight. 22:20, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Uh, I did all of the above. Just wait for changes to show, (If they do.) The Current Version should have a lighter ear-pink on > this side, and brighter eye coloring

Blur the chest highlight more. 22:38, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred it. Just wait for the Changes to show! <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  23:10, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are some pixels on the tail that arev lighter than the rest. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Damn <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">Skippy. 11:54, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. 12:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-UploadedI fixed the tail. Wait for changes to show! ;)<font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  16:19, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, nice job! Define the earpink. I can barely see it. 14:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

And fix the waste below the tail and the little dot of waste above the ear. 18:08, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed! ;) <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  01:13, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's still some waste. Make sure to get rid of all of it. 23:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed, just wait for changes to show <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  15:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a gray nose 20:32, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the tail shading. 15:25, September 1, 2011 (UTC)]

Also define the earpink. 22:40, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Fixed! Wait for Changes to show! ツ <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> Twilightheart   <font face="Papyrus" font color="#66ffff"> The Stars Align...  00:54, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

How'd you do that smiley face? xD Anyways, make the earpink more visible. 17:16, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing from when I updated it before, as I gave her a gray nose and defined the earpink. If, after it updated, then the earpink needs to be defined, I'll work on it.. 19:22, September 2, 2011 (UTC) (Wasn't logged in at the moment) Changes are showing now...

They are? There's some waste near the tail. 23:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Fixed 21:06, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and enlarge the highlight on the chest. 03:20, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 20:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink alot. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:07, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour. 20:37, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 23:19, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink. 01:16, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Agh...I used Pixlr on this try because Gimp wasn't working... 00:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source, and according to it, add a highlight to the tail and the correct shading/highlights to the head. 22:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Harrykit (K) ~ For Approval


The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 06:45, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I moved this to the bottom of the approval section for you. Please keep that in mind next time. 06:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the blotch of shading on his shoulder/ face. Other than that, looks good. 13:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, there's no light source. Look at this on how to do shading. 22:34, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:42, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 05:14, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and make the ear pink more triangular. :3 Mi  st  y!  07:31, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are too light; darken them a bit. 23:17, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 15:48, August 31, 2011 (UTC)'''

Rename this "Harrykit.kit.png" 20:45, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 00:47, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded.The name can be changed when it will be approved.The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 08:44, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

It won't be aprroved until yu re-name it i think. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:46, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

But if is to rename-it ,it show two options:change the name,or the original image.This is the original image:

.cries The Gost Pazuzu ,the greatest villain ever! 15:36, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Just change the image dear, It's fine, I'll show you changes, and if you don't like the way it looks, you can revert it back ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 20:49, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose. Moonstorm88 10:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights as well. You still working on this, Gost? 03:23, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Weee, tiny green font xD But it has been a week sience this has been uploaded, I believe this is declined. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:59, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

If this is declined, can I take over? 00:05, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Snowdazzle, if you don't have another image up for approval, he's yours. 01:14, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll work on him tomorrow. 01:37, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This sucks D: 20:21, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks GREAT, dont be a downner. Define the pupil Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Change the nose colour to grey and erase the waste beside the tail. 00:56, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Why is he short haired now? He looked long-haired in the graphic novel to me. 19:43, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, make it longhaired and darken the shading. 22:19, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (A) - For approval
Since one image is declined and one is withdrawn, I made this one. Comments? 22:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  22:47, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you. :D Blur the shading. 23:30, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his white body and make sure there's shading on his farther hind legs away from us. I hope that makes sense... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 23:32, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make his back paws black too. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:47, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shade his underbelly. ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 04:08, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks fine. Just darken it a tad. 23:50, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:54, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

The changes don't seem to be showing. 06:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Give them some time. When there are a lot of images, sometimes the changes don't show. 06:05, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink just a bit more :3 Mi  st  y!  03:50, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Blur the haunch shading a little bit. 14:06, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink. 23:21, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and round out the shading on the white areas. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:31, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:41, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more on the white areas. Don't be afraid to make it look a bit gray. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:05, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darn, I think I messed up pretty badly this time! The highlights look all wrong. 05:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Psh, no you didn't. Just define the highlights some more on the tail, and blur the earpink. 22:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:12, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur any more. 22:57, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Q) - For Approval
Yes, since a few things are archived i am now allowed to post this. Anyway, Comments?



00:28, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit. Sorry, Pearl, this will be declined. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:40, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

It was under the limit before, Seems like someone made it over the limit, Apologies. 20:56, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think it was because you, Icestorm and I all put our images up at the exact same time. Sorry, Pearls. =( 23:49, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

But Hey! you can always re-post it once any of these get approved! 8) -- 00:11, August 30, 2011 (UTC) I guess this can stay up. Take the ear pink off the farthest away ear. 00:50, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, Changes arent showing. 21:01, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The nose should be black. 23:02, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done, Changes arent showing. 23:14, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Mitzi_(Lo).queen.png. 01:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the face up a little it is hard to see her mouth and whiskers. Other wise great job! 20:23, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, Changes arent showing. 21:19, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the neck shading ever so slightly. Looking good, Pearls! 02:16, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Changes arent showing 00:04, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the front paw shading/highlight. 00:39, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'd Like to withdraw this, for the moment, i'll keep it reserved due to the fact that i'm gonna be camping, Sorry guys! 21:18, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind that, They have wifi 21:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC) 21:24, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Did you re-Upload it yet? 22:13, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks very good. But I mostly say that about everything. XP. There is some waste above her back (near her neck). 22:57, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ~ Small tweaks Pearls wanted me to do. Very minor. ;) 00:31, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks atelda, Anyway the fair has been pushing my scheduals around, so i might not be able to work on this. 02:28, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Then are you withdrawing it? If not blur the shading. 03:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. i figured everything out, Sorry atelda -- 17:03, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! :) 21:21, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There is still some waste by her neck, other than that it looks great! Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 21:26, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There are some blotches of really saturated shading along her shoulders and around her belly. Blur those and then I'll put CBA on this. 03:14, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

@Scarletwind Which areas are you meaning? circle them and email them to michtea2000@hotmail.com. Thanks. 20:42, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shoulder highlight? 00:16, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Here. There's also some pale gray lineart within her right forepaw. Change that to black please. 03:17, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, Changes might not be showing. 00:02, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ban you lighten the whole thing a bit? 22:22, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) ~ For Approval
I don't really like this image much, but here he is. Any Comments?

Stoneclaw33 12:29 August, 30th 2011

Dethumbed it. Blur the earpink and highlights. 20:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink a bit bigger and triangular, then blur it. :3 Mi  st  y!  21:05, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, and the highlights on the haunch and shoulder. If you didnt, shade and highlight the Herb, because i dont really see it on my laptop. {User:Fallenstars/Sig} 21:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

give him a pale belly. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 23:00, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The herb color looks a little bright, perhaps darken it. Once you do, add shading to it. 23:11, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Rename this Mudfur.mca.png 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Changes aren't really showing except for the earpink and herbs. Stoneclaw33 05:52 August 30, 2011

There is a bit of white on one of his back paws, can you fill that in? Mi st  y!  01:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Mudfur.mca.png. 01:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- I filled in the little white bit of white on his hindlegs, renamed him and gave him a pale belly Stoneclaw33 08:23 August 31, 2011

The shading still needs blurred a lot, and give the herbs some depth. 21:30, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a bit, too. Mi st  y!  00:26, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate it a bit, so that it matches his Medicine cat image. 15:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink, and blur the shading. 00:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a couple days. Just letting you know that you need to work on this or it will be declined, ok? 20:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Changes aren't showing much exept the shading, I blured the shading Stoneclaw33 5:41 September 5, 2011

Darken the shading on the pointed shoulder blade on our left. 22:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The whole thing sorta looks blotchy. Blur both the shading and highlights. 01:00, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- I desaturated it a bit, and I blurred the shading. {+{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Stoneclaw33/Sig}+}StoneyAwesome 15:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I still thikn that the highlights could be blurred a little. 16:26, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste along his back. Fr os  t  e  d  A  p  p  l  e   02:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

There is a white spot on one of his hind legs, can you fill that in? Mi st  y!  22:24, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the highlihgts and define the earpink,. 23:37, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade(Lo) ~For Approval


So here she is....People did this vefore, so I don't see why I cant, Once Fleck is withdrawn, this will be number 35. I took all colors from her Warrior image, this ish my first image....so comments? 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

NICE x) blurr the earpnik, smudge where the white meets the brown, and define the stripes -- 00:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She looks miscolored, take the colors from her warrior image. 00:09, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I did, sweetie, it is just I shade and highlight differ than Mosspool. I use Pixrl, I think she uses Gimp, thats all ;)

Anyway; Reuploaded. Thank you, Blueorca^^ changes aren't showing. (I think I need to blur the stripes, don't I?) 00:21, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Extend the stripes a little butm and blur them some on the legs. 00:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Butm? And this is the same stripe style on her warrior image. 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

The white from her tail is too far in, blend it a little better. -- 00:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
 * bottom, xD, sorry. 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She has a bit of white on her haunch on her warrior image, so I did that here. Or do I get rid of it?.... 00:56, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the warrior image is facing left, and loners face right, so they don't have to match that much. Blur the earpink, darken the shading, lighten the highlights, and blur them a lot. 01:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It just looked weird to me, but whatever. Define your light source so that it falls over the high and low parts of her muscles. 01:25, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think the white on her should be just a bit lighter.. So that we can see the shading and highlights. Mi st  y!  01:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? 03:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a bit more ;) Mi  st  y!  04:10, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a patch on her front leg/arm closest to us 05:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It isn't the same style as her warrior image. Splashpelt is correct. Extend the stripes or re-do them. 20:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll re-do it.(Well the stripes anyway. ;)) 23:18, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows that? 00:15, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

better. Blur the stripes, and it looks kind of 2D. Try using the regular loner shading (See Fleck's loner version under this one.) 00:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Due to the fact, my sister, Flowerpatch isn't on, I want to point this out; Ivystripe uses Gimp, Flowerpatch Does not. Therefore, she can't match the shading, sorry. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:40, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The fact that I have GIMP has no impact on that. I practiced doing the shading and looked at how loners were shaded, on the high parts of theit bodies you just don't add shading, and on the really low points you add extra shading. I could do it without layers. 14:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match her warrior image. Even if you and Mossy use different programs, you can still match it. 16:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Dips head* Okay, I will see what I can do. And Sis, Maple. We BOTH know, I hate it when you try to help me, and I've told already, to NOT comment on any images I do. Lets face it, you hate me, and I hate you. 22:20, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

All programs use the same basic tools, so you should be able to. ;D I use pixlr, and it works just fine. And, try to get along for the sake of PCA. :P I'm sure that if one of you was falling off a cliff, the other would save them. Lol. 23:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sis, Changes are showing now, darken the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:58, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * sighs* Fine fine, I'll try....anyway, Reuploaded, I tried to match the shading style. Changes aren't showing. 13:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think she has ginger on the front leg away from us, or on the back paw either. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, forever <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">flying 17:20, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you dont see the parts i added ginger to, so i did it anyway, she seemed to have more White than ginger, so I added more ginger. 17:28, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh hey, wow, changes are showing, what are the odds? ;) 21:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs farthest from the viewer 21:26, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:24, September 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * gigles* Is the image so good, you can't find a thing wrong with it? Is this why it lacks comments? ;) 02:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back leg seems a lot darker then the rest of her. I suggest lightening it. 03:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad on the white areas. 03:47, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Flower :) Right where the tail starts, where the ginger is, there seems to be a bit of color lighter than the rest of the ginger. 03:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gunger meets the white on the mzzle. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:43, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wow I can't type. -.- I meant Ginger, and Muzzle. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  08:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To make it more consistent, Move the left back leg patch to the top, take the patch on the left front leg off, and make the right front leg patch wrap around the leg. Moonstorm88 11:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, can you explain that? Like dumb it down. Not that I'm dumb! I'm dislexic, so is my sis, and she can't firgure out what you mean, so can you explain it for me? 13:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, is that what you meant? 00:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The changes probably aren't showing. What I meant was to make the back leg behind the pointed one put the patch on the other half of her leg but take the other one off. On the front leg, the one behind the pointed one, take the patch off. On her other front leg, make it so it looks the patch goes around her whole leg. Sorry for the confusion. Moonstorm88 01:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. Thanks, me and My sis, Flowerpatch, HATED the fact we couldn't figure it out, and it should be like... the....sixth one down, i think. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more stripes to the ginger patches, darken the shading on the tail and legs, and blur the ear-pink a bit more. 03:11, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- i added some smaller stripes everyhere and there, darkened the shading on the tail and legs, and blurred the earpink. comments? 17:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail. 23:35, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I made the tail highlight more visabile. Comments? 15:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC) Looks good sis! Just blur the shading a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:49, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- What else? 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the tail highlight. 00:22, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki)- For Approval
This was supposed to be here because Cloud is withdrawn. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:18, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we weren't allowed to do that? Post a charart before the images are archived. I may be wrong, but I just thought one of the leads said that atsome point...... *shrugs* Anyways, fi it stays up, redden the earpink a bit and make it bigger. Looks great! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw! I edit conflicted with you 3 times over this. This will be declined and im tired of typing out why. 00:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Icy! XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:26, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But I was editing the same time as you, and Lakestream(?) is supposed to be approved. Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  00:32, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

It is over the limit until something is acutally archived. 00:35, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's exactly 35 images. I just archived Lakeshine. 00:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. But for future reference, please don't post until the conflicting image is archived. Voleclaw needs a gray nose. 00:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur everything. 00:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, sorry but there was only 34 when I uploaded but I guess Iceheart beat me to it. :) Wild  fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  01:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. 22:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure if changes are showing and @Pearls what do you mean 'Blur everything.' Why does the nose have to be gray? Wild fire <sup style="color:gray">Hazelx <sup style="color:brown">Thorn!  22:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

@Wild Sorry, that was when i wasant thinking. I apologize. 22:51, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading under the chin and blur the highlight on the chest; it looks a bit blotchy, darken the shading on the right side. 03:04, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail and blur all the highlights. ` 23:23, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

i thought voleclaw was black oh well. Nice job but the shading is blotchy blur it some. 23:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The right earpink looks smaller than the other. Also blur the forehead shading. 00:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just letting you know, you need to work on this or it will be declined. 00:59, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Night (Q) ~ For Approval
So, I made Night as a kit mother. I hope it's good. Comments? 22:06, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Needs more mudstreaks. Try and make them look like her cave guard image, if you can. Blur the highlights as well. 22:08, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a grayish-black nose 22:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

VERY nice! blur the stomach highlight & make the mud streaks more realistic(smudge). Also add a few more smaller streaks like Skye said -- 22:12, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add more mud; smudge it, and define the shading. 22:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Didn't see the above comment 'til now. I'll define it. 22:56, September 6, 2011 (UTC) (Defined)

Make the mud streaks a little brighter. Other than that it's beautiful :3 23:02, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; Brightened it. 23:13, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

She ish glowing for all the waste around her, ge rid of that, LOVELY image! ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the haunch. 23:28, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; I re-did the shading, so sorry if it looks different. 23:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I love the shading, if you want my opinion. Ok so blur the mud into her pelt more. There's waste next to the front paw farther away from us. And there's a tiny bit of waste on the ear closest to us. 11:25, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I also think that i see some waste above her back. Can you fix the ear closest to us, the back, and the paw farthest from us? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 18:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded;

Define the earpink, I can't really see it. 22:41, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the highlight on the face, please. I'm having a rough time seeing it. 00:00, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; 22:14, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose black, and lighten the highlight on the tail. 23:19, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded; 23:14, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the mud on the tail tip, it makes the tail look kind of faded. Good job. :) 00:56, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot to add this in. Also redden the earpink. 02:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (Q) ~For Approval
This is my first charart, please tell me what you think. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

1) De-thumbed it

2) Define highlights (assuming that they're there) 23:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights, make the noese black, blur the earpink, make the earpink longer, and darken the shading. 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

And when you darken the shading, blur it. 23:21, Septembe Minor edit

Preview Add features and media r 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, darken the nosepink, and recenter the earpink. 23:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make her look glossy 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. I know some users don't like using highlights, but since her description specifically says that she has a glossy pelt, they should be used here. Darken the earpink, and you don't really have to make the nose pink. Plenty of black cats have pink noses. Just make sure it matches the ear pink if you leave it as is. 00:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

When she says glossy, I think you just need to make her shiny. Maybe some white will help, but I'm not sure... 00:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, not pure white. But the highlights could have a slightly zig-zag pattern to create the glossy look. That's how the light usually hits a shiny black cat, anyway. 02:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

True, white would make it zebra-ish when I think of it. 04:16, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

You can use this as a reference for how light hits glossy black cats. 16:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I think i reuploaded it, i saved the new one with the same name as the old one. Changes aren't showing.  Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 21:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more. 21:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more like Silvereye said. Then make it look a bit more... glossy looking. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. 21:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wait, nevermind that. For some reason I thought this was Night (KM). xD 21:50, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred the ear pink and tried to make her look more glossy. Petal<font color="Yellow">step' 22:05, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, it's way too big xD 22:44, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look way too layered. Blur them out. 01:15, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and thin it out. 02:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

smooth out the highlights on the tail & haunch -- 04:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 06:56, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Redid the shading, hightlights and ear pink. Changes aren't showing. Petal<font color="Yellow">step' 19:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes darker, they're really neon right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Fixed the eyes :) thanks paleclaw  Petal ''<font color="Yellow">step 19:11, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, blur it. 23:15, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the shading. Changes are not showing.  Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 15:03, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The right file isn't showing up, I'm trying to fix it. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 17:09, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing. (finally!) Petal <font color="Yellow">step'  20:00, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Her eye fartherest from us looks....green? And she looks cross eyed. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:50, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the eyes :) (thanks maplepool) Petal <font color="Yellow">step'  16:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink extends too far down. Move it up a few pixels. 13:52, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the earpink. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 19:27, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make her look glossy. 19:18, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and the earpink. ` 23:10, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mist (Lo)- For approval
My second one. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 20:52, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:56, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fail at loners already. -.- <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 21:04, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's waist all around the charart. Get rid of it.

Whoops, that was me ^^ 21:07, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading a little more visible unless someone disagrees. 21:10, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, waist, but there is also like blank spots everywhere. Please color that in. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:18, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just noticed the blank spots and filled them in. Hopefully all the stupid waste is gone too. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 21:28, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, the waist is still there. and also, there is a white spot right behind the ear. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:34, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Unless the changes aren't showing Rain. 21:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, you might be right about that. Though where it was blank before, it is filled in besides right behind the ear and the waste is still showing. oh, also, i'm not trying to be mean or anything. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:39, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I got the white spot, and is the waste still there? -.- <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 21:40, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I can see a little still there. 21:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Which area? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 21:52, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think around where you've erased. What I do is paintbucket the entire area then see where the waste is. 21:54, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I've gone over it, and didn't see anything. Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 22:08, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is much better. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 22:27, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Also, Rainface, please don't comment saying "much better" or something like that unless you have more critiquing for the image. 00:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 00:29, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. This is looking good. 00:38, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. :3 I probably need to blur the shading again though. >.< <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 00:48, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Not really. Just get rid of the large amounts of gray around the image. It gives it an aura. 00:56, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I always forget about that...>.< <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 01:17, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and darken/define the ear-pink. 02:58, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 03:39, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Circled in pink is miscoloured lineart.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 06:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

There was really no need for the picture. You could have just told Skystar where the miscoloured lineart was. It just takes up space. Also, Skystar, enlarge the ear pink and make it a tad bit more pink. Not a darker neon pink, but a light pink. 06:54, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 20:45, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a tad. 03:20, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 06:19, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch highlight. 23:11, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">scum! 00:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail highlight! This is epic Sky! ^^ 21:49, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Me thinks me is getting the hang of this. ^_^ <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">scum! 12:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Blur the tail highlight more. 23:15, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (Q) ~ For Approval
First charart. Tell me how i did. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 20:26, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed it for you. Blur the shading and highlights. 20:29, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's the 36th image, so it'll be declined. 20:30, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, this was posted before Flight (somehow it got moved down., look at the times) Add light parts to her arms. So many edit conflicts! :P 20:32, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hiya Rainy, it looks good but I think the shading and highlights need to be blurred more. ;) Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart  20:46, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I'll work on the haunch leg by the way. I know it is still a bit darker. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch's shading. 21:42, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Have the shading go all the way up the haunch, and all the way up the shoulder. Blur/smudge it more, and darken the shading a tad on the face. Also, add some shading to the eye. 21:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know that you're about to reupload, but the haunch really needs blurring, and the tail.=) Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart  21:53, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I made the eyes on her warrior art an orange-ish amber color in honor of her name (I actually used three different shades to add depth, you'll have to zoom all the way in to get all three pixels of color). Feel free to download it file and copy the color for the sake of consistency. 23:19, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I re-uploaded awhile ago. Sorry, my dad dragged me away before i could write that i did re-upload. and, i know no one can really zoom in here, but i have different shades for the eyes. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:35, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''Not sure if changes are seen on here, but they can be seen from her file page. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 01:52, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's better but can be blurred more. Do it on 100% a few times with a big brush it should help SpottedtalonMudears 03:39, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to do it? It wouldn't be a problem. And you can zoom in by saving my file and opening it in any art program. 11:22, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rename it as Sunfish.queen.png and blur shadings. Leaf-storm,13:37,September 9,2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I know the legs need to be tooken care of. i found a method that helps with with blurring now, so i will use that on the legs. I will also re-name it when i am done editing. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 18:37, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Yeah, the whole thing (not including the lineart, obviously. =P) needs to be blurred a LOT. Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart 20:28, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is too much shading on her front legs, lighten that up. 20:31, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, blur the shading a lot. Also define the earpink. 22:44, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''The changes aren't showing here on on her file page though. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 13:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There is too much shading on the front legs and their blotchy anyways. The whole thing still needs shading. Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart 13:57, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''@Silverflower, don't you mean the whole thing needs to be blurred? Also, the shading is getting on my last nerve. I've gone through it 30 times and it's pretty much the same. I've even used the smudge tool. Can someone help me with the shading getting more.. blurier? (however you spell it) Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  20:32, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I just blurred the front leg for Rainface, by her request. 21:08, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Now you need to blur the haunch's shading. 21:10, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''Took care of the haunch's shading, anything else? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Umm....... any comments on this now? Or should it be CBA'd? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star  22:31, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I re-named it so i thought i should tell you i re-uploaded. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 23:19, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still looks blotchy. You should use Gaussian Blur (A filter), it doesn't come out blotchy. 23:30, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... Silvereye, not to be rude but i use pixlr and there isn't a Guassian Blur tool there. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 23:48, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There is a gaussian blur on Pixlr. It's just if you don't use layers, there might be a conflict with the lineart. 14:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 18:42, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ummm.. I wasen't doing this in layers. i just took care of the shading and highlights on the first layer. Was i not supposed to do that? because if i wasen't, i'll redo the image and make it look pretty close to this. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:48, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, the eyes look almost white. Please rectify this. 20:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. @''Shellheart: They do? Ok, any way, i think i might of fixed that. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:09, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. And sorry I sounded snappy. I felt as if my comments had been ignored. ^^; 21:12, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok Shellheart. This is my first charart so i wouldn't really blame anyone for sounding a bit snappy. I don't understand a bunch of the stuff i did on here and i now think this charart looks amazing. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 21:34, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and there's also some gray around the charart. 21:37, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I think it is blurred as far as it will go. Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 22:08, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's still gray around the image. 22:13, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Right, thanks for telling me. ''Re-uploaded. ''I think i got all the gray from it. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 22:15, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There stil seems to be some waste around it. I would add a layer and color it a bright floresent color and then you can see where you missed some of the waste. Lighten the highlights or add some and then you might want to use an airbrush/fuzzy brush and make it a color inbetween the highlights and shading and then color over the edge of the shading so it's smoother. And then blur where needed. Nice job! 23:33, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I think this is AMAZING now. Comments? Also, i will TRY to see what i can do to lighten the eyes just a tad. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 18:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''I brightened the eyes to match her warriors pretty closly. Comments? Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :3 22:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looking better! :) Maybe a tad more blurring on the flank and tail...it's lookin' good! Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart  00:04, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I tried blurring it but it won't blur anymore. Sorry. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 00:41, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want some help with blurring it? 19:16, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, that would be nice Loudsplash. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 19:29, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the earpink; it looks faded. 23:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-uploaded. ''Changes aren't showing yet. Hiya! I'm Rainface <font color="lime" style="background:none;">star 00:39, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Flight (PH) - For Approval
Ok let's try this again. Comments? x3 23:42, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, lighten the fur color, make the mud look like the mud on her kit-mother image. Make the eyes a tiny bit darker. And make the stripes on the tail for noticeable. (yeah ik thats alot im just in a very bad mood, dont be yelling at me about it either because im sure im not the only one who's had a bad day) 23:46, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud streaks and the stripes. 23:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Since Rainy is leaving and Fleck is on CBA, I could take this over if that is ok? 01:36, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I have no chararts up for approval and your Fleck is still on CBA, so, maybe could I? 01:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, since your charart is technically still on the approval page, you can't take another charart. Let Icey have it. 04:57, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart said it's ok when I said something about Cloud, that if it was on CBA that she would've let me take it. And mine can be archived at any time. It's not a big deal, I just thought it was ok since she said that. 04:58, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

That I did not see. Well, since Fleck is approved, you can argue about which one of you gets it. 05:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'm not sure how we can do this... 14:22, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Errrr......Ivystripe has already reserved this. 14:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I never actually said I was withdrawing this... So I'll just keep working on it so there will be no arguements. :P 14:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then blur/smudge the edge of the earpink more. 23:22, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Soot (Lo) ~ For approval
Comments? 22:53, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

My first loner. xD And I've blurred everything as much as I can. 22:55, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink just a tad more? If not, I understand. 22:56, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awww dang it Dx I was just about to post Piketooth, and chu beat me to it. Ah well, back to waiting. This looks great, Define the highlights a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry! Don't worry, Firekit is also approved, and will be archived soon. Re-Uploaded. 23:04, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not your fault. Don't worry ;) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:08, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wait... aren't her eyes green? They look blue to me. 23:59, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

They're teal, but I'll change it to emerald green. Re-Uploaded. 00:00, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink. 05:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the back leg. 15:09, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 21:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (A) ~ CBA
Comments? 23:45, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very night ^^ add a little more shading to the haunch, You beat me x3. 23:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

define/add the highlights on the front legs & you forgot to put some shading on the front leg farthest from us(near the top) 8) -- 23:47, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. This is really good! Make the ear pink a tad smaller/center it. 23:48, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

also, blur the tail highlight a bit. Looks awesome, especially for a first charart! :D 23:51, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Re-Uploaded. 23:57, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks like it's touching the lineart. 00:34, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thats because its black. Still, I guess you can center the earpink a bit. 00:36, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the shoulder highlight a tad. 12:37, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

''Re-Uploaded. '' 22:53, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 23:31, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail (E)~For Approval
Here she is 00:22, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, blur the earpink, and she doesn't have a brown tip on the top of her ear. 00:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks blotchy, make the earpink triangula, wheres your light source? -- 00:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do everything in the morning. And the light source is like above her muzzle. 00:26, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. 00:28, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Seriously? I just had 4 edit conflicts with all of you. I think you should redo teh shading to make it less blotchy, and do the shading according to Nightshine's tutorial. Also, the earpink is blotchy. 00:30, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

If the light source is there, then there shouldn't be shading on BOTH sides of the tail & on the forehead -- 00:41, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

All the shading really needs blurring...and the tail is really blotchy. Silverflower <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> ...the flower of the heart 01:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Silverflower, there is no need to repeat what has already been said. 01:39, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'm just going to redo this, if I don't have it up by 9 then I won't be able to do it until tomorrow. Sry... 12:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED better? I have serious issues with ear pink XP 12:37, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, blur ear-pink Leaf-storm,14:02,September 10,2011 (UTC)

Better! thin out the shading on the tail & make the shading a darker tan like the others -- 15:55, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink just a bit more triangular? I'm horrible at that too x3 Mi  st  y!  16:06, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the face. This is comin' along very nicely! ^_^ 12:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED can someone help me thin out the shading on the tail? I'm having serious trouble with that. But that's all I need help with. Is this a dark enough tan or should i make it any darker? 16:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help! -- 16:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. 16:31, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded There ya go. Changes arent showin' yet x) -- 16:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thank you. 16:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  09:46, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I will not lighten the shading as I was told to darken it. Shouldn't this be approved soon? No rush but I haven't gotten a comment that needs reuploaded for in... 15:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

You will lighten the shading if someone suggests it. We're here to help you make this image the best it can be. It won't get approved (let alone a CBA) if all you're doing is being stubborn. Plus, the shading's way too dark anyways. 16:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * sigh* REUPLOADED Again, not trying to be stubborn or annoying but it was darkened so it would match the warriors charart. Arg...(i'm beginning to hate this image more and more) 17:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Now it looks better. It's an odd color to work with, if you ask me. Now, can you smudge the ear pink back into the ear? 17:20, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED is this any better? Arg, I has serious issues with elder earpink XP 18:12, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and smoothen out the shading. 21:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wing (Alt. PH) ~ For Approval


Meh...The shading looks horrible. Shall re-do it later. XD Anyways, comments? 05:25, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add some mud to the head, smudge the earpink a little, and add some to the foot. 05:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The mud on her tail is touching the lineart...I think -- 05:31, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

D'awww.... Cute! Blur the mud a bit. 05:32, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur and smudge (?) the mud a bit. Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 15:12, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading some :3 15:45, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The mud streaks look like they are blood spots. Make them more brown. 17:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:34, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Rainey! Darken the shading a tad, and brighten the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:50, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Rainey, you forgot to add "For Approval" to the heading. I fixed it for you. =) 04:10, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Cloudy! :D 08:07, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The mud streaks still look kinda red, but they look more brown than last time. 12:24, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye, the mudstreaks do not look a bit like red. It is a mixture of light and dark brown. 13:16, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possible darken the highlights on the tail and paws. Otherwise this looks amazing! 23:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the earpink. Lovely charart. ^_^ 01:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:28, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the back a bit. Great job! 23:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights on the mud need to be dulled. 23:30, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (W) ~ For Approval
Icestorm told me she had approved Silverhawk, so I put this up :P Guh, another black cat. The slots for images for approval go so fast... Comments? 16:54, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

What is this I dont even. =.= I wus gonna do this one, check my profile. First Tigerheart, now this? Are you kidding me? brighten the tail highlight. -- 17:11, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Relax, Bloo. You didn't reserve this. Splook reserved this. Ayways, beautiful like always. Blur the shading. 17:24, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I have the right to do this, Bloo. You already have Tanglewhisker up, I'm sorry. 17:37, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 17:40, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but I COULDNT reserve it, could I? I have no idea why Tanglewhisker was so slow. Its like you people dont think I can actually contribute to the project. Brighten the tail highlight more & lighten the earpink -- 17:43, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Bloo, calm down. Add a little highlights to it to make her look glossy. 17:45, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Bloo, take some ice, cut it in the shape of a pill, and take it, i call this a chill pill. Define the tail highlight a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:47, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just brightened the highlights I already had. Look, Bloo. When did I ever say that you never contribute to the project? You do, greatly in fact. Just forget this happened, I was doing what PCA was meant for. 17:57, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

@Maplepool U Mad? Anywayz, I dont mind you doing Shimmerpelt. I just wanted to know if you guys think Im actual help to the project 8) soo..yea, Thicken the highlight on the tail -- 18:05, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mad like anger or rage? Nah. Mad like insane? Then yes 8) And Bloo, chu are a help to the project. she doesn't llok that glossy...Thicken the highlights? Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 18:18, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

I already said that Maple /shot 18:44, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I used more highlights on normal, not overlay x3 So I'm trying to make this look as glossy as possible without ruining it :D 01:38, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty ^^. I honestly don't see anything else that needs to be edited. 12:23, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading along the back. 12:31, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you, Silvereye :D 15:56, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular. This is awesome, btw! Petal <font color="Yellow">step' 18:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think the earpink looks triangular. Blur the highlights some more, this looks very nice. 01:01, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! :D 21:32, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot. Although, this is much better than the image I pre-made. Nice job. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:54, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks again :D 23:38, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 01:15, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you redden the ear pink a tad? 17:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:33, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch and tail are blotchy; blur them and smooth it out at those places. 22:00, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm pretty sure I blurred as much as physically possible. 00:22, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, where's the light source? If its from the side, then the tail highlight should be towards the middle more, and if its from the back, then the tail highlight should be on the other side, and the back highlights should be closer to the back. 00:31, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) ~ For Approval


AT LAST!! Okay, here he is! Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:40, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tooth a tad bit smaller as even a cat with protruding teeth wouldn't be that big. Define the shading on the back feet, especially th one furthest away 02:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The tooth doesn't even look like it's hanging from the jaw, it looks like it's hanging beneath the chin. Either make some curves to the jaw to make it fit the tooth (tweak the lineart), or make it look like an exposed tooth from either angle :p 02:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I will play with it. Lets see what happens. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:52, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I messed....erm...played with his muzzle, and shark his tooth....so.....comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

If the tooth is going to be there, atleast put a little bit of shading there. and you should make him a little more glossy. 12:21, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you should like draw a mouth... then put the tooth in. Blur the earpink, it's blotchy. 15:41, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't say he is glossy in the book, or in his desc. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:51, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- i tried to make him glossy(even thou he was never TOLD to be glossy, and messed with the tooth.) Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:13, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

XD Looks cool! Maybe try moving the tooth up a little bit. It looks a tad like it`s protruding from below his mouth. It *giggle* looks like a goatee.Make the ear-pink fill the ear little more too. I sometimes imagine alll the elders with flowing, long, luscious, black mustaches and getting all the she-cats because of their good looks XD *bursts out laughing* 16:30, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, i've been gronded, so has Flowerpatch, so we can't work on our images, so please dont decline them. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:12, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * groans8 i can't get his tooth to look right, it annoys me. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

If it's less than a week you'll be fine, otherwise someone will be allowed to take them over. 18:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

As I suggested before, draw in the mouth and move the tooth up so it doesn't look like his teeth are coming out of his chin. Then again, does it even really need the tooth? Stonetooth's teeth aren't showing despite his description. 20:33, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, i think he might, and I'll sneak on every now and then so i can work on this, same for flower. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:40, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so I re-did him, beauce of two reasons; One1 He looked red-brown. Two. I have decied to not show his hooked tooth. Stonetooth doesn't have a hooked tooth on his images. So...comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:50, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the markings a bit. 03:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and fix the blurred lineart, also on the ear. 06:25, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

REdden the earpink. I love the stripes. :) 23:23, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thatnks :) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a ton. 01:14, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Break up the stripe on the back a tad, at least, not entirely straight. There's also a few miscolored pixils in the ear with the earpink, it has a little of the main pelt color instead of the darker one. Nice job so far 16:01, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, wich stripe on his back? There is like 7 stripes on his back. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:39, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also redden the earpink, it looks too pink. 00:23, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

The ones that runs across his whole back. Just make it slightly irregular. 01:04, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt. R.) - CBA
Since we agreed that if a manga description is a lot different that they would get an alt., I think this this is enough to be considered for an alt, and since she died as a rouge, I made her a rogue. I think this is one of my best. Comments for improvement? 04:07, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and also, I tried copying her markings to a t. I couldn't decide if the half or all of her chest since they changed it, though, and I did some guesswork with the colors. 04:08, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more noticeable. This looks really neat! 04:11, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and thanks =) I think my charart keeps getting better with each one I do. 04:14, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Dayum! I think this is pretty much your best one XD smudge the black spots moar -- 04:18, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and by the way Blue, even though it doesn't bother me, you should probably watch your language on the talk pages since younger users use this site. I'm glad you like this! 04:37, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more visible. 12:15, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:21, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I love this! Blur the ear-pink, I think. (Unintentional rhyme, I swear) 20:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and really now? ;p 20:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading lighter on the belly, it makes it look gray. Nice work! 01:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:26, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the tail so it doesn't look so gray. I really <3 this. 06:24, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) 15:41, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. Looks awesome! 23:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded 01:27, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a little more, and I think this may be ready. 16:06, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded And oops, I didn't mean to wipe the page...dunno how that happened... 20:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Me to Cloudy. CBA? 23:29, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wing (PH) ~ For Approval
Moonflight started this, but withdrew it. It never got done with the new blanks. I LOVE the mudstreaks. 03:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This looks awesome~ Blur the paws a tab more :) Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  03:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! 03:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and isn't the shading supposed to be on the bottom of the tail instead of the top? 04:12, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's around the whole tail. If you look on her kit mother image, the top half of the tail is gray, and the bottom half is white. 04:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:17, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more, and blur the shading, too. 23:12, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar (K) - For Approval
I'm actually quite proud of him ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  03:29, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! This looks excellent. Darken the highlights ever so slightlty. 03:31, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the bottom part of the white not so long, like make it in the shape of his chin like in his leader. Wonderful work! 03:33, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Better? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  03:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular. 11:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. 20:29, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''REUPLOADED~ Better? ^^ ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:53, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 20:55, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, too. :3 23:11, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) - For Approval
Ugh... I think I really hate this one... Comments? 04:10, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the dark brown more like the caramel brown color on her kittypet image. 04:12, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's gray around the image. 04:26, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make it a little brown-ier. That happens sometimes. Try the caramel color to make it look more alike. I would try to color-pick the color from one of the existing images and make it that color. Very good :3 21:05, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define the earpink a bit. Nice work! 23:10, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

To go with the light source, add more highlights to the tail. 01:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fallenstars, there's no need to repeat what I've already said. 01:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I made it worse... 03:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a little brown on her muzzle. No no no you didn't make it worse, trust me! 15:59, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowfern (W) - For Approval
heheh...well this is embarrasing. It took me FIVE TIMES to get the shading right DX -- 06:21, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Don't feel bad. I've had shading issues before. Speaking of, darken yours, if you don't mind. 06:22, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 06:34, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. :D Looks great! 23:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

the shading on her neck is a little too dark and looks likea scarf, lighten it a bit and blur it. Other than that awesome job! 23:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Jeez, since when did I suck at chararts? idk if changes are showin' -- 00:35, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, if you have them. But still, if you don't, blur the areas highlights will typically go. 00:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploaded - No, I dont use them, but I tried -- 04:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like part of the lineart on the top of the tail got cut off. Thicken the lineart. This is coming along nicely Blue 8) 15:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The feet are the same way. Also, can you make the ear pink more pink? 16:07, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Oops. uhh...my bad -- 00:00, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsetail (Q Alt.)~ For Approval
Yes its kind of icky, but thats what you guys are for. Now i have to go change my reservation on the table. Comments? 23:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

It's not Icky at all, it's great! Take the lighter spot off of the big stripe in the middle of the back. Also define the shading a little more, or highlights. 00:27, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 04:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly add a stripe on the neck for a tabby necklace, as most tabbies have those? It just seems a tad out of place when it is all stripes on her neck, but it's your call. This is gorgeous! 15:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! Can you darken the shading a bit more, though? 00:33, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) for Approval
This is my first Charart on WWiki. Any comments? HollyleafOfThunderclan You have their friendship, and that is a loyalty that never dies  00:30, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

add shading to the neck and stomach -- 00:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink to a reddish color, and not pink. 00:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to be longhaired. 00:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

And, it should be the same color as his warrior charart. 00:26, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (A) ~ For Approval
Here is the other version that I have just made using the suggestions you all made. How does it look? ~Cloudclaw1

Make it look like her queen image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, see her queen image, it is a mainly white, like you did, but the tabby patches are light brown and the stripes are a different style. When you see the queen picture, also make sure to have the patches match up to where they are on the queen image. Just thought that would help. :) 23:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

What happened to all the comments that were here before? o.o Did they get deleted? Anyways, blur the patches adn the earpink a bit more, anad mke the earpink lighter and more natural, it's really hot pink right now. Also, there seems to be a lot of blured or miscolored lineart, I suggest pasting a whole new blank over it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:07, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Match the colors and everything from the queen image, and add more shading. 00:20, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps smudge the patches upwards using a tiny brush for kind of a fur effect? Also, smudge the stripes and darken them and make the earpink a little smaller. 00:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

o.o Oh no!! The blurring of the patches!!! Darnnnn... I'll redo it now

/just went through the history to see where all the posts went. Cloudclaw, when you reupload the file, don't delete all the posts, just type Reuploaded in bold below all the comments, so people know it's reuploaded. We're not supposed to delete comments from talk pages. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:05, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (KP) - For Approval
I never realised how epically cute the kittypet blacks are. XD I'm not completely happy with the stripes on this, but meh. *hopes that this is still below the limit by the time I hit the submit button* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:43, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Stunning, Paleclaw. Redden the earpink just a tad. This looks amazing :D 00:50, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Thicken the upper stripe on his forehead to match his deputy image. 00:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)'

Reuploaded - Thanks guys! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:04, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink just a smidge.... and your tabbies are freaking EPIC. 01:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I seriously have a hard time thinking of him as a kittypet... Ahk. Anyway, he looks a little darker than his warrior charart to me. But otherwise, you've done a wonderful job. 01:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Cloudy, you tabbies are the epitome of epic. Lengthen the stripes coming off his back and darken the shading on the foreleg. 04:05, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the ear pink to match the deputy image? 15:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Shellheart, the reason it looks darker is cause there's more shading on kittypet images that warrior ones (at least the way I shade them). I took all the colors from his deputy image. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  16:41, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the head. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:15, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the earpink, and blur the shading on the collar. 00:24, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ For Approval
I'm pretty sure Beetlenose's kit image isn't taken. And I think it's under 35 (until I posted this) So here it is. This is my first charart so I hope I did well... ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄ <sup style="font-family:Papyrus;color:Navy">Freezing in the Summer!  01:55, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

kewl (de-thumbed it) define the shading some & add earpink x) -- 02:16, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

And make the nose a dark grey. 02:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are the eyes filled in? Sorry, but my own eyes are acting up again...so, it's kinda hars for me to see. 04:25, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're right Cloudy. The eyes aren't filled in. 09:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

add earpink, Make the nose black, lighten the highlight ont he tail. 22:01, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄ <sup style="font-family:Papyrus;color:Navy">Freezing in the Summer! 23:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

And rename this Beetlenose.kit.png. 00:32, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Birdsong (E) ~ For approval
I've done better. Comments? <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:27, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

It says a tabby and white she-cat with ginger parches. This doesn't seem to fit that description well. I only see one ginger patch, and it didn't say white patches. Tabby and white typically implies that they have a white underbelly. 21:32, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool is a tabby and white, and she doesn't have just a white underbelly. Tabby and white can mean anything, but if it's a big problem, I'll change it. As for the ginger patch, there are two, but they appear as one and I'll fix that. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:40, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also, if she has a gray muzzle, define or, or make it gray. The ginger stripe on her face needs to be ginger spots, as indicated in her description. This is really neat tbh 21:41, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Correction: some of the gray flecks got lost in the gray muzzle, which I defined. The "stripe" is supposed to be two spots. I'll probably just redo this, but it won't look a thing like it does now. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:45, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, and make the tip of it closer to the top of the ear. 00:30, September 14, 2011 (UTC)