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Boulder (Alt W) - For Evaluation
Comments? I can't do shading, so can any warrior help? Also, BG Color? Tigertastrophe (talk) 17:58, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Size the image down, please. The heading needs to be Boulder (Alt W)- For Evaluation, since you are a kit. 18:01, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

This also needs to match his other alts in the set, since this is from TUG. What program do you use? To make the background transparent, find the magic wand tool, select outside of the lineart, and hit delete. To add shading, pick a color and paint it on, set it to multiply (if you aren't using layers, please use them, they are useful) and lower the opacity. Then blur/smudge with the tools to make it a gradient. 18:09, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

I use the Paint Program on Windows. It doesn't have layer options. Tigertastrophe (talk) 21:05, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

You should use a program that allows you to use layers, such as GIMP (which is free), Photoshop, and Pixlr (also free). 21:41, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

When you do get layers, add shading and blur the colors a little. 00:52, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

I already tried downloading GIMP, but apparently my PC doesn't have enough space, even though I've deleted alot of files.. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:17, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Oo, wait hold up. Pixlr editor works, alrighty gimme a few days and I'll fix this warrior up. It may be late since I have exams, but I'll try otherwise. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:20, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Where do I place the shading? I checked apprentice tutorials, and it's not there. Tigertastrophe (talk) 16:09, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

here you go! 16:28, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, the Tutorials don't show how to shade the new warrior blank, just the old one. Here and here  are some examples. 22:45, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, Greenflower. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:14, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

finished and re uploaded. Couldn't find the delete for bg. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:05, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Rename this to File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png. You need to use the lineart of the shorthair warrior blank. 00:33, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Pixlr should have the magic wand tool. You need to select outside of the lineart, and press delete. Don't get me? See the Tutorials, I think they have a tutorial on making the background transparent. 00:39, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh forgot we got new blanks. I apologize for that. Also, I renamed it for you. Please continue to reupload over File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png. And would you like one of the files? I have the elder and rogue files if you wanna match the colors from them. Speaking of which, there shouldn't be any stripes on the chest and paler parts around his muzzle and eyes. 03:15, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, Vector! Any of them would be fine tbh. And I'll be sure to check AP. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:14, May 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reup. Maybe I just shouldn't be making charart, I'm still a newbie to all this stuff.. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:07, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

This should be uploaded under File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png not what yoy uploaded it as you have to keep replacing the previous version.  Ellie  life is an illusion 00:23, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Make the background transparent, and the stripes are a gray-green color on his other alts. If you need help with the background, just ask. 01:08, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge everything. And don't thumb your images! 01:59, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

the earpink looks blurry and out of place 14:24, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

the shading source seems to be contradictory, as there is shading on <-- side (his back) but also on --> side (front of his chest)

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It appears you are not using layers, as the colors are leaking past the lineart. Pixlr has a layer option, it's in the bottom right corner, and is a paper with a fold at the tip. Don't get me? See the Tutorials. Lineart also appears to be missing. -- 23:14, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

You still have some time left, but are you still working? 18:29, May 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (Queen) - For Approval
Time to slink back into cat art hell now I've fixed my programs :) Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 15:58, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lessen the belly shading some?  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:25, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I don't really like to just say it's fine much when possible but I feel like the belly shading is ok, my minor character queen has roughly the same amount. I'll do it no problem though if someone else agrees with you, Mink. ;; Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:07, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

meh it looks fine to me, sorry mink. 18:18, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

The base appears lighter than the apprentice, which I believe is first in the set? 18:28, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you center the pupil on the -> eye <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:13, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

You still have some time left, but are you still working? 17:27, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I'm gonna try and re-up either tonight or tomorrow probably <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 19:10, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

Zack (K) ~ For Approval
winging it i guess (adding collar next reup)

08:29, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly curve that shoulder shading upwards to match the shape of his shoulder? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:10, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

reups got the collar on

14:22, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you curve the shoulder shading a tad more to the right? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:23, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

reups

15:29, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shoulder shading and the haunch shading (the part next to the tail). Also I think gray from the tail is leaking onto the hind leg farthest from us. :) - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:50, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

You still have some time left, but are you still working? 01:18, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

yea i am, i'm gonna rush to get this up --

10:06, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

reups

10:09, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the base of the tail, farthest to the right? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  12:35, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 02:20, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Onestar (Warrior Alt) - For Evaluation
Im not very sure if this can be made but I saw it under the characters that need art. I tried to make it as similar as possible.

Sorry if I did make a mistake of making this, im very new to the project so here it is... Kezii (talk) 01:43, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

By the way I also used FireAlpaca if there needs to be changes. Kezii (talk) 01:45, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Welcome to the project! You are able to make this i believe, but since this is your first Chaart, this is for Evaluation I'm pretty sure, Don't thumb your images or align them (|thumb) (|left or |right), Put the image before any flavor text you wanna put along with it! This should be named File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png aswell. The < eye is looking a bit gray, and shading could be defined. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:03, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I have the leader file from when I was doing this, I can email if you want? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:56, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink. 13:37, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I tried all the suggestions, fixed gray eyes, and added ear fur (to make it more similar to the alt leader) Kezii (talk) 23:14, May 29, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into source mode and remove the |thumb. Also avoid thumbing by going to the file and click "Upload a new version of this file". You need to upload this as File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png, or the image won't work with the wiki's templates. The lineart also appears to be missing in some places, namely the ears and paws. Brighten up the white on both paws, and define the shading everywhere on the white. Can you also smooth out the chest shading? 00:29, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

The texture, I believe, looks a little rough. Could you smooth it out?

The hind paws should be white too, and I think the hind paw furthest from us is hidden? It should be visible. 01:14, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Oh, and I use firealpaca too so if you have any specific questions, let me know :) 01:21, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could also afford some smoothing on the hind leg closest to us. 20:55, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

idk if it’s just my phone screen, but there appears to be red around the lineart? some of it seems to be on the lineart

yeah, the colors seem to be leaking out of the lineart, and the lineart itself is red/blurred in some places. <span style="">13:33 Sat Jun 1

Dark Forest tabby (df) ~ CBA
accidentally called him a rogue, oops. could someone please change it?

reups just realised a few layers were hidden lol

Don't worry; everyone makes that mistake at least once lol. Renamed it for you ^^ Please continue to reupload over File:OTS-6.df-18.png. And the stripes look very linear and uniform. Perhaps trying to taper some of the ends, or varying their widths, or curving some? 18:33, May 28, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Could you also define the eye depth? 01:15, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

reups idk if you can see the difference?

CBA? 17:23, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudstar (W) ~ For Approval
woop 00:04, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Blazefire (K) ~ For Approval
i'm not emotionally readdddyyyy 00:04, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Smoothed the flank shading a bit 01:32, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

With how the source is (please tell me if this makes no sense) it almost feels as if the shading on the > half of the tail should be swapped to the topside, like how we swap halfway to keep a good source on StarClans sometimes

Cloudtail (Ki) - For Approval
He gets no collar since technically I don't think he had one and he spent more of his kithood in TC than he did with Princess.

A few small things; there appears to be a sharp bit of shading kinda at the base of the tail; perhaps that section of shading that rounds out the bottom, which almost connects the tail shading, could be a bit more rounded to the shape of the cat, and the shading seems a bit blotchy around the front leg/neck/whatever that spot is area

Cloudtail (W) - For Approval
I love Cloudtail.

Birchface (W) - For Approval
My son. Overhauled the pattern since I don't have to match my old StarClan image, nor do I even remember how tf I made it to begin with.

Birdwing (W) ~ For Approval
00:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Ashheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors from original image. Comments? 00:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC) Define the shading depth a little? 01:23, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Ashheart (W) ~ For Approval
All colors from original image. Comments? 00:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch and < front leg shading, and I feel a small touch of light on the chest would help add some depth

Bluestar (Ki) ~ For Approval
The only one of these I'm semi-proud of. All colors from queen image. Comments? 00:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Dawn Mist (W) ~ For Approval


Define the shading on the ginger part of the tail, and perhaps the facial shading as well?

Re-uploaded just defined it everywhere

Beech Tail (k) ~ For Approval
i like... tried to match the old kit, but i don't think i did the stripes justice

Could you add some shading behind the ear (on that ear fluff), and maybe define the shading depth all throughout? 01:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Crookedstar (W) ~ For Approval
01:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Might you soften the stripes ever so slightly? I think this has been lost over the time with his images, but the stripes were always meant to be a tad on the soft side with Ivy's version of the leader. ​​​​​​

Reups 01:50, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the < front leg a touch?

Very minor but there's a tiny speck of waste on his back. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:18, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) (W) - For Approval


Define the shading just slightly on the front legs? 01:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Defining the overall shading wouldn't hurt, actually. Also, would you like the colors from the StarClan version? I'd gotten the colors from the original warrior, so everything is the same despite it being by two different people. ​​

I think that would help if you don't mind! 02:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Breezepelt (W) - For Approval


His eyes look a lil more yellow than amber, but that's just my opinion. -- You remember the past  at the expense of the future.  01:49, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I color picked from the apprentice, but if its that much of a problem I can change it  01:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Try picking from the old warrior. When this set was tweaked, that was the one who held the master coloring. ​​​

reup 02:09, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Clawface (W) - For Approval
will fix the scars

Could you define the depth in the eyes? ​

reup  02:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little? App was first approved in set (before tweaks and all), and it seems a slightly different color there

Breezepelt (K) - For Approval
back before he wasn't a meanie. also, leaving for france tomorrow so uploads might be spacey in the coming week <span style="">01:44 Sat Jun 1

Cherryfall (W) ~ For Approval
love her to bits

I think some shading from the leg is leaking onto the tail a little if I'm not mistaken. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  03:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Oh there's also a chunk of waste at the end of < side of the tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Doestar (W) - For Approval
Oml I thought I almost missed my chance to snag this lol. I love this pattern and I tried to follow the shading style that was going on in her set. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  03:04, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the back leg closest to us. 03:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I left that section of shading sticking out to sorta do an illusion of the bent leg, similar to this. (I admit i didnt use a ref beforehand)

Brightheart (W) - For Approval
totally haven't had this done for over a month and a half eheheh nooppee   03:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading in general? I really have to squint to see it. 03:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (W) - For Approval
mlady 03:44, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Defien the shading on the black, and the depth on the silver. 03:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Thin the dorsal stripe on the tail a touch^^ Looks nice :)

reuploaded thank you!!! 14:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Cloversplash (W) - For Approval
Comments? I love that clover leaf. 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

She's dark brown, I'm v sure the splash should be clover shaped. It should probably match what the old one shows. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading needs to be smoothed out around the chest/legs and there is a bit of waste by the tail 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It says shaped like a clover leaf, not a clover itself. I'll fix the base and shading tomorrow *decides to steal Loudbellys coloring*. 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

a clover leaf is a clover lmfao, either way it should resemble the shape of a clover. Shouldn't the coloring match the old one??? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with mink :/

04:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't the clover technically the whole plant, and then a clover leaf is an individual leaf? I'm not sure, but Potato might have a point. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

no, lmao. the shape on the muzzle doesn't even resemble clover leaf, I said that this should match the colors and design of the old one <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:59, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I know what you were saying, I was only arguing about the "clover leaf isn't a full clover" thing. Anywho, Potato I think there's waste on the actual lineart of the tail, as well as near it like Ty pointed out. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  05:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

didnt we aree that all iamges should match the old one or whatever 12:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

If that's true, I'm fixing it right now. 13:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded So I googled a clover leaf and what I got was a full clover, so I matched it to best of my ability. 13:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (w) ~ For Approval
i can't do torn ears... or texture rip. my gimp crashed so i had to use another program, and i'm rly unfamiliar with it so that's why this charart looks a lil blotchy

Lighten the shading half a tick? I also believe the ear should be slightly altered as well; to add back a bit more at the top, but add more gashes, just to match the other images

Blackstar (W) ~ For Approval
I'm still experimenting on the tint, the shading is sposed to look like it does btw <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups here we go <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading?

Also, looking at the leader, there should be at least a scar on this side.

Looking at the old warrior, he didn't get his scars til he was a deputy? I asked about that before I started and I was told he didn't have them during this time <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:38, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I also went to check his page for the cites of the scars but he doesn't have them?? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm unless a cite pops, it's fine as is. But, the haunch shading does need to be receded here, the source doesn't call for this much.

Cedarstar (W) ~ For Approval
here he is, apparently my laptop cut off the lineart a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:26, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a block of waste by the tail

Crookedstar (k) - For Approval
question for his alt; how will we show his crooked jaw considering its been shown on the otherside on this blank?

I figure, he just won't have the alt? Considering it can't be seen lol could you define the head and shoulder shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:32, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I mean its definitely possible, but, I wanted to know first. reuploaded too

Bramblestar (k) - For Approval
baeby

Blizzardwing (W) - For Approval
trawled the archives for instructions on how to do this; it was insane matching this one whoo

Bluebellkit (K) - For Approval
I think I did very well with my first white cat. Comments? 13:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

blur the shading along the tail near the point? <span style="">14:48 Sat Jun 1

Blackstar (K) - For Approval
I don't think the back paw farthest from us would be showing, so I didn't add it. Anywho, comments? 13:52, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) - For Approval
ladie 15:08, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Beautiful! Define the shading depth a tad, especially on the forlegs. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)