Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Snooky(A) - Redone
OA is Iceheart, looked gray and black. Comments? I think I failed with th shading. x3 21:05, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still looks a bit grey. Define the shading and the eyes - I can't see them. 22:46 Mon Dec 24

Re-uploaded I redid the shading. owo 23:02, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, the light/depth in the eye, and blur the patches and if the wrong version is showing, just ignore   02:44, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redid the shading again, and I think the eyes are fine. owo 23:19, December 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes need to be lightened too. At a certain angle they look black. 00:01, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the edges more blurred than smudged, to match the other images? 01:23, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the patches look kind of pixily/sharp altogether, use a smoother brush to soften their look  06:02, December 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I'm actually not using the blur tool at all, I'm using the smudge tool to blur it all, I did the same on the kittypet. x3 05:55, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

The splotches still seem a bit pixel-y. Also, mind defining the shading some more? 19:43, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:09, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. 08:49, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the shading yet again. x3 01:53, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Some if the patches look a bit blotchy, just around the edges. Can you fix that? 20:42, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think the patches look fine. Shading could be darkened/defined more though, still rather flat. 07:51, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:26, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

I'm with Misty on the patches thing. 19:28, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:24, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

The patches still look very blotchy, particularly on the haunch + belly areas. Define the shading and smudge/blur where the pelt meets the earpink. Also, on the back ear, there's no shading whatsoever. 20:36, January 1, 2013 (UTC)

I think the patches, shading and earpink are fine. Also, I know there is no shading there, I'm using a different shading placement, but if another person agrees with you I'll change it. 20:46, January 1, 2013 (UTC)

I think you could blur the top of the middle of the largest blotch on the haunch...I hope that makes sense x3. It's a bit sharp. 00:16, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:43, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Floss (KP) ~ Redone
Redone because reasons and OA was another user. Coemmntsa? 08:13 Sun Dec 30

Could you define the shading on the gray? 14:34, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:17, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine as is, imho.

Do you think you could lighten or darken that ear. Right now, it looks like it's not either white or the grey on the rest of the body, and looks like a whole 'nother color. 20:24, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail just a tad? 20:39, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 08:21 Mon Dec 31

Blur the shading a bit more, especially the tail and above our back right foot. 17:39, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

The grey that is over one of her eyes isn't on the other two chararts. I know it was like that before on the old image, but can you get rid of it so it matches the other two? 03:54, 01, 01, 2013

I understand this is the artist's decision, but the eye highlight placement is a little awkward. It looks like the (our) left eye is looking at us and the (our) right eye is looking down. Fix please? 20:32, January 1, 2013 (UTC)

Eyes are fine. And the gray actually is there, it's just on the wrong side right now. xD Switch it over dearie. 02:18, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded' 03:18 Wed Jan 2

Plumwillow (Alt A) ~ Tweaked
I did not redo it, I swear by the shipping of Nuna. Okay so it turns out I didn't have the xcf for this, because I didn't save it all those months ago. Tweak because reasons, and OA was some n00b called Berryflower123 (dunno who that is, but their chararts sucked =P). If it looks redone, it's because of the way I fail at tweaking with xcf's, but I had to redo the earpink because I failed and didn't check before blurring the old shading and stripes into the depths of hell. Comments? ouo 03:56 Mon Dec 31

I hate to say this, but I don't think she should get this. x3 The two times her and her siblings were seen she wasn't called out by name, she was just standing in that order when called that, they never called her that by name. It was like the Birdy, Pad, Little Mew and Raindrop chararts, they were just called the names and we assumed that they were in their order, though I believe only Little Mew was decided to receive one. So, in short I don't think she should get this, or her warrior alt2, unless I derped and she was definitely called out by that. Sorry, believe me I don't want to do this, the alt warrior2 was my first approved charart. x3  17:38, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

If this does stay up, define the facial + belly shading. Stripes don't naturally cross over each other, but if majority likes it, it's probably fine. Blur the shading on the paws into the leg shading a little more. And attempting to put yourself down isn't very funny. 20:30, January 1, 2013 (UTC)

Stripes are fine. 02:20, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

On the bottom of the feet, that isn't shading, that's just something I assed, and I can remove them if need be. 03:36 Wed Jan 2

No, other tabbies have the same thing, no need to remove it. 11:04, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Assed ouo 11:06, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Whitewing (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Wildfire.

Can you define the shading? 22:44, January 1, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine. With this blank, and white in general, if I do much of anything else to it, it's going to start to look gray.

Can you define it a tiny bit? 18:05, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

I'd really rather not...we got into this with Cloudtail, too. If I define it too much, it will look gray, and someone will tell me to blur it, then it'll be a neverending cycle. Especially with these blanks. I think it shows depth enough.

You don't need to darken it. Just kinda un-blur it. 01:53, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

I think the haunch and tail are defined enough, it's just the shoulder, face, and legs imo. 05:29, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Smoky(Lo) - Withdrawn
Made the white white. OA was Twee, comments? 01:43, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur it on his head, shoulder, belly, and haunch to make it blend in more. 02:26, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

I can barely see that shading on any of it. Could you define it? 02:41, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and re-tweaked. *coughIfailcough* 05:09, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

The white on the face/neck/tail looks grey. Define the shading and blur the shoulder shading. 16:38, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, so I'm withdrawing this, because it's giving me problems. x3 21:22, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Cloudy sent me the file and I redid the shading. Comments? 21:43, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

I know it's optional, but could you darken it? He looks a touch flat. 01:51, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. 03:54 Thu Jan 3

Spottedleaf (MC) - Redone
fffff I dun like this. Redone for a lot of reasons. Last OA was Iceheart. Comments? 04:24, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

Weedwhisker (E) ~ Redone
Redone for multiple stuff. (paleh let me so no killee??) 05:56, January 3, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste around the face. This is so pretty?? 16:11, January 3, 2013 (UTC)