Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Sandynose (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweaked
Hope I did removing the texture right. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:20, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

This one has eyebrows while the apprentice doesnt. (idk which one matches the manga, i don't think he had eyebrows but it could be the other way around)

It was the way I shaded it last time, I can remove that. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:53, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

The manga doesn't have the eyebrows, so remove it.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:36, January 14, 2018 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:29, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Bone (D) ~ Redone
OA by me. Redone for artist's choice. 18:15, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

there should be a lot more black on the thigh and the body, and I think there's the black on the hind legs. 18:18, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 18:24, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the furthest front leg and the back legs and the face a smidge? And smooth out the shading around the muzzle area? This is cute! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 19:13, January 13, 2018 (UTC)


 * Adding onto my comment- I don't know if it's me or the way the Black was place, but on the start of the tail(by the back bone), there's a place of the black that basically cuts off the tail coloring like a straight line.. if you know what I mean? Smooth it out to go with the flow of the coloring to the tail? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 19:14, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

Wouldn't this have texture? 19:36, 1/13/2018

i dont see texture on the rogue 19:46, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

I think the black is oversmudged, compared to the other images.Stealth f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:07, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

The rogue image definitely doesn't have texture. Also, the smudging was good on this version of the deputy, for reference.

Reuploaded Ugh, sorry for this being so late I've been sick the past few days and have mostly been sleeping. 19:19, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

It's alright, Pepper. ^^ I've been sick too, so I totally understand where you're coming from. Could you smooth out the shading on <-- front arm?

Mudfur (W) ~ Tweaked
I... I failed. <span style="">04:10, 1/15/2018

Don't forget to list the artists who worked on this, please.

can you add some mottles aorund the area you removed, it looks a little bare 07:13, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My bad @Snowed. Was created by Moonflight, with a new version by Snowed, and the final version by Stoneclaw. <span style="">00:00, 1/16/2018

Could you make the mottles look more like mottles? Right now, it seems more like a fur texture, and I know Applefur was recently tweaked for the same kind of thing.

Firestar (Alt L) - Tweaked
OA is Burnt, and this was ten times harder than it needed to be.

Shouldn't he have a paler muzzle to match the other alts? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 07:09, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Yup, I eliminated it by accident not realizing he had a pale muzzle. Re-uploaded.

can you define the shading depth around the chest/neck area

Re-uploaded.

Could you define the shading on the face a big? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 19:19, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Mudfur (ki) - Tweaked
OA is A Beautiful Oblivion, tweaked to remove pale muzzle and chest. Accidentally uploaded it to the nominations page lol. 15:22, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink in --> ear and add some mottling to <-- side of the face? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 19:18, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:55, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Add some more bottles in the middle of the face a big? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:05, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:25, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the mottles look more like mottles? Right now, it seems more like a fur texture, or stripes in this case, and I know Applefur was recently tweaked for the same kind of thing.

Mudfur (MCA) ~ Tweaked
OA was Stoneclaw33, tweaked by Dapplecloud33, redone by Snowdazzle, and tweaked again by Ivystripe. (I think . . . stuff can get confusing) Tweaked to remove pale muzzle and chest.

Add some mottling where you removed the pale parts. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 19:17, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the mottles look more like mottles? Right now, it seems more like a fur texture, and I know Applefur was recently tweaked for the same kind of thing.

re-up may reupload cause this is ugly

it's not ugly. It just blends in with the shading a bit. maybe try changing the layer settings?

re-up Still not satisfied; had to fiddle around with saturation and darkness and opacity (because if I set it on multiply it becomes dark chestnut)

Bone (W) ~ Tweaked
Removed texture, and also fixed the shading. It was terrible. <span style="">00:36, 1/16/2018

I think there would be more black on the thigh area 19:26, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope the changes are showing. <span style="">22:26, 1/16/2018

Add some lighting to the back paws. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 22:43, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading to those claws, please. There's enough space there for at least a little bit.

Millie (W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for torn ear. OA was Bramblesnow. I also removed the eyelashes, if that was okay too. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:12, January 17, 2018 (UTC)