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Bone (W) - CBA
15:40 Fri Dec 21

The scars need to be more reddish. The teeth need to be whitened and the collar looks dull as well. The eye scar should be moved up a little bit, it's higher on the rogue.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:07, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I honestly think the scars and teeth are fine... —

I agree that they look fine. The ear pink could be defined, though. I really love this 20:13, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry if I'm a rotten potato here, but when I looked at the rogue and deputy it doesn't match. Shading is covering the lineart on the most noticeable hind leg, and there needs to be less teeth on the collar.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:54, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think it matches the rogue fine - all the chararts were done by different artists and Sunjaw's style works fine here. ^^ —

If you think you can do better, Potato, then by all means, go ahead. I'll remove a couple teeth, but bone and teeth yellow with exposure to dirt/blood/sunlight, and I will not change the color of them. 21:56 Fri Dec 21

I think it's fine, as Sun said with that exposure they would be yellow. Could you define the shading on the legs please, I'm not seeing any there and I think there would be some on the <-- side of both legs. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:03, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

My only critique would maybe be expanding the convas by a couple pixels on the bottom so his claws aren't cut off as much. ^^ This is absolutely lovely. —

Reuploaded 20:42 Sun Dec 23

Could just be me, but the collar looks like it is to high up, can you lower it down? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:44, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

It probably appears that way with the way the blank is, I think it's fine imo. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   23:52, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? Nicely done! 17:36, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Silverstream (Alt Ki) - For Approval
That is shading, not texture btw. Matched the warrior but I can redo the pattern to match the queen if I need to. 15:58 Fri Dec 21

This is lovely, can you darken the leg stripes a bit? I think the stripes may still have to match the queen but I'm not totally sure. 22:34, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think the darkness is sufficient.

I think they're a little lighter than the warrior so maybe darken it a little? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   05:41, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:41 Sun Dec 23

can you define and/or smoothen out the shading on the front right paw? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:44, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Those tasks contradict each other, Owlbite. Smoothing would imply it's too sharp/defined and defining would imply it's not visible enough and needs to be sharper. 17:35, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading like what Owlbite previously said? I can't see any. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 03:23, 12/25/2018 ]

Rainflower (W) ~ For Approval
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22:50, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

The shading seems too dark, though it could just be me/my screen. SquidwardPlays 22:53, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

I agree, it could be smooth out on the cheek as well as lightened. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:55, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Agreed. Smooth it out on the legs too. Is there supposed to be shading on the muzzle? If it is smooth it out as well.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:06, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

should be some on the belly too. 23:14, December 21, 2018 (UTC)

Shading and highlights both could smooth out a bit more. They look very stark. —

It is (the shading) leaking away from the lineart on the back leg. 00:21, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

^ Along with that, some of it is leaking onto the lineart. —

Her other images do not have texture, so I don't know why this image appears to have texture. 14:07, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

It doesn’t have texture, it’s just the shading ^^

15:25, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Don't forget to reups ;). Can you add some more shading along the bottom of the hind legs/paws and front paws? 23:07, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Could you also smooth the cheek shading some more, it seems blotchy and very stark to me. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:56, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

can you smoothin out the shading, almose evrywhere? it dose look like texture. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 07:40, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Owl, it's suppose to look like that. The shading is artists choice. There are different types of shading styles and textured is one of them. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   08:46, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Is that shading on the muzzle? It looks kind of odd and out of place. 14:15, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

reups

15:48, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the face seems to be a different colour than the shading on the rest of the body, could you change that? :) 16:17, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

reups

17:20, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

the shading on the front leg that gose to the back, can you smoothen that out? it looks flat.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:42, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

The shading still looks very blotchy. Is there anyway you can maybe like - take another colour to use to blend the shading? I can't explain it so here's an example of what I mean, sjsfkljdkf. —

Lower the opacity? That may help.

with this kind of shading, you want to be adding much more lighter streaks around the darkest areas so it ends up as the rough gradient ur aiming for. 12:10, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

reups

14:34, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add some more shading to the paws closest to us? 17:33, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Sandgorse (T) ~ For Approval
19:01, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

thank you for taking over! can you smooth out the shading at the base of the tail? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:00, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

This looks great! Can you add some more stripes around the edge of the jaw? (Towards the ear). You did great replicating the pattern but on the warrior there seems to be more stripes there. 22:36, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Reups :) 23:13, December 22, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define tail shading. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:45, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 01:18, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

From looking at the StarClan which shows some skin on the ragged spots, could you add those? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:25, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

The skin is present, but small I'll admit. Did you want me to expand them? 01:27, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, if you would. They seem to cover at least half of the ragged fluffs. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:34, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Hopefully this is better? 01:47, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah that seems better! —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:55, December 23, 2018 (UTC

This Pixellooks super off putting. Also, this looks very very nice! Silverfur  skz  [ 13:26, 12/23/2018 ]

Thanks! Did you mean the pixel on the paw? I’m not sure what you want me to do about that...it’s present on all the other tunneler images. 15:21, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it's suppose to be there cause it's really looks out of place. Hmm, looking at both Sandgorse's other images, there seem to be rag fluffs on the tail and not outside it? Maybe could you add some? (sorry if it feels nit picky or maybe it's just artist's choice.)

Silverfur  skz  [ 16:35, 12/23/2018 ]

Ultimately, ragged patches are artist's choice yeah, but I'm open to a second opinion. I feel like since there are ragged patches present on the tail that they're enough imo 00:34, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

With the angle of the tail in this particular blank, I think it's fine^^ 16:17, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Riverstar (Alt. Cotp) - For Approval
Alright, I’m putting this up 80% done, and I’ll do the rest tomorrow. Earpink/nose colour and base colours were given to me by Icy (thanks Icy!). I still have to add shading depth, remove all waste, tidy up, etc. 06:54, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, please don't commment on the shading—I know I have to work on that tomorrow. 06:55, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you fix the eyes? They seem wonky a bit, the --> eye seems to be pointing in a different direction. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   08:55, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Alright, shading is fixed now, as well as the eyes. 20:07, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the eyes? 04:11, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Riverstar (Alt L) ~ For Approval
thinking emoji. —

Define shading, please. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   08:56, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

The texture here looks purple, and I used a dark gray colour. Also, it looks very thick and flows differently than mine. The earpink seems like it’s a different shade. Would you like my file? :) 20:10, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Winter :D Hopefully this looks better! —

Looks great! Forgot to mention, but could you flick the white around the eye up a bit like mine and Spooky's? :) 21:30, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded —

Firestar (Alt A) ~ For Approval
not sure what to think about this

Can you dedine the <-- front leg, smooth the haunch shading, and define tail shading please. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   08:56, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Darken the shading? It's still not very visible. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 09:39, 12/24/2018 ]

Re-uploaded didn't increase the opacity that much bc it looked weird

Dwfine the earpink a smidge in --> ear--Potato Flakin (talk) 15:54, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded expanded it

Sandstorm (Alt W) ~ For Approval
She looks like she has blue eyes in the picture. Kind of like this one. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:24, 12/24/2018 ]

Reuploaded Made the texture more visible. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:29, 12/24/2018 ]

Can you lighten the haunch shading a bit? And I’m not exactly sure what your light source is. 13:42, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded when you put shading on the lineart layer Hope this makes a difference? the tail shading was ruining the light source. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 13:51, 12/24/2018 ]

The shading looks lke it's leaking way from the lineart on the back a smidge Malina457 (talk) 14:59, December 24, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define the shading on the right front leg--Potato Flakin (talk) 15:55, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, define the shading on all the legs 17:32, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink a bit! :) 20:12, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Silverfur   skz  [ 03:17, 12/25/2018 ]

Define the light on the legs.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:35, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

'''Reups. Silverfur  skz  [ 04:15, 12/25/2018 ] '''

Riverstar (Alt ES) ~ For Approval
took the colors from winter's file 19:45, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Awesome, Spooky! It’s minor, but could you flick the white around the eyes up a bit so it matches the picture? You can look at mine for an example, sorta like that. :) 20:12, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded think I got what you meant, smudged it upwards quickly 20:17, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt Q 2) - For Approval
The queen, in more ways than one SquidwardPlays 22:50, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Define the leg shading and texture.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:58, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

On All legs, or..? SquidwardPlays 23:02, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

I think the back legs are fine, but the front legs need defined shading. 23:05, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Reups SquidwardPlays 23:28, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

can you define texture, the first image uploaded has more vivid texture. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:02, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Has it been defined enough yet? SquidwardPlays 00:07, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

It has, but the earlier upload's texture is very stark. Maybe sharpen it a bit more? ^^ —

Riverstar (Alt Lo) - For Approval
02:04, December 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the white on the muzzle a bit more? This is cute. ^^ —