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Heavystep (W) ~ Tweaked
Recent OA is Raelic. 22:05, 5/19/2018

There are a few spots of the old color: back of the neck, chest, and a few pixels above the bellyish area between the front and back leg. There's also waste by <- front paw

This base should be lighter to match Birchstar. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading? Color tweaks sometimes get rid of shading or make it appear non-existent.

Fixed. Idk what to do about the color. 18:27, 5/20/2018

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ Needletail 🐾 #Litten 13:53, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Heavystep (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color

This should be the base of Birchstar's leader. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what else I can do. The shading on this is much darker than the apprentice, so it seems too dark, but the lightest color on this (like the face) does match Birchstar's leader (If anything it's too light)

The color I have compared to this is very different. 09:30, 5/20/2018

Define the shading.

Reuploaded Idk what to do Broken, the color matches Birchstar

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ Needletail 🐾 #Litten 13:53, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think I've matched the color the best I can, unless someone really thinks it could match better

Heavystep (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is Raelic, tweaked to match Birchstar's color

This one seems lighter than the other images. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:04, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes it seems that way. The elder was darker than the other ones before I think because of the shading. I colorpicked the base color of both and the apprentice is actually a little darker than the elder. So should I leave it since the base color is basically the same, or darken it because overall the image looks lighter? I'm not sure Actually, I'm not going to darken it because the color of this is the same as Birchstar

I believe he should match- so maybe make it darker. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:18, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Is it the same color base as birch's leader? Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:22, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Yes

Define the shading. The color tweak now makes it look flat.

Reuploaded

Here is the base color and stripes color from Birchstar's leader. https://imgur.com/a/7JfQ5BQ <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:53, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Same as above ^

it could stand to be tweaked some more, it's still too different. 20:22, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to darken to match Firestar. OA was Scarletwind. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 15:32, May 20, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does this look more brownish than dark ginger-y? <span style="">05:05, 5/21/2018

it's too brown compared to firestar himself. 06:27, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:47, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

same as tge kit; there are paler parts scattered throughout the original design. please define them 18:26, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 01:22, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define them a bit more? I still can't see a difference.

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 05:03, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

I still can't really see them on the rest of the body. 07:43, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 00:16, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (Ki) - Tweaked
OA is Burntclaw; tweaked for a darker pelt like her grandfather. I had to define the earpink after I darkened it, plus smoothed a few rough pixels out that looked super orange. 02:03, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think we should wait until the discussion that David brought up is over before tweaking this...considering she's called pale orange far more than she's called anything like Firestar.

Wait this isn't Bellaleaf. IGNORE ME.

I thought you were supposed to keep the earpink color the same

Seems fine to me. It's pretty hard to keep the ear pink color the same without the original file in cases like this.

Re-uploaded. to match her warrior. Yeah, i needed to define it, it turned the same color as her pelt when i changed the color. 13:52, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

this covers up the paler parts i had scattered throughout the pelt in the original design, can you ppease define them? 18:26, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Let me know if I need to add any more. I hope I didn't just ruin the stripes on the chest; if I need to I can try and fix them. 21:11, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) - Redone
OA is Stoneclaw, redone several times by Sziri, Loony, Splook, and Burnt. Redone to match Hawkfrost and Bramblestar. 17:22, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be a little variation in Bramblestar and Tigerstar's stripes? This is like, the same image just with different shading

the entire point of these being redone yet again is to make them virtually identical. 21:30, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

yeah, they're supposed to be carbon copies of one another. The stripes are good as they are.

Can you define the lighting on the legs and tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 01:18, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 23:42, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Leafpool (MC) - Redone
OA is me. Redone. 17:25, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#438134; font-size:85%">17:27, 5/21/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">) ​

Re-uploaded: 20:34, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

I think all stripes should be more smudged out, and the stripes on the legs should be more horizontal, thin, and dense

May you please be more specific by "smudged out?" 22:10, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Oh sorry.. I'm looking at the warrior since that appears to be the first, and the stripes just look more smudged. These stripes look like they were blurred maybe? And I think they should be smudged. Like with the smudge tool. I can't think of any other ways to explain what I mean. I don't know if this comment helps at all, but if anyone else knows what I'm talking about and can explain better, please do

I can second that. It looks like her stripes are more smudged then blurred. Maybe slightly. I also think the white should extend all the way down as it shows it on the apprentice, unless it's supposed to be like that. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 04:43, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: On every single one of her images, other than the apprentice, the white does not reach all the way to the arms, like the apprentice does. So I do not want to touch the white more than it already is. 23:44, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add depth in the herbs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 23:49, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 23:53, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on all the legs completely horizontal, and add more stripes to all the legs as well

Re-uploaded: I am not adding any more to the front legs because that is ... simply what I have to work with. 04:08, May 23, 2018 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (A) ~ Tweaked
18:47, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading just a bit. <span style="">22:10, 5/21/2018

reuploded 07:56, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Flowerstar (Star) ~ Tweaked
i don't wanna do la hw someone help me

for placement to match the other images, you'll need to remove the ginger patch on the < shoulder, and have the patch of ginger on the chest reach upwards more

Crookedstar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Iceheart22. Tweaked by MountEverest and Shinx. Tweaked to add a dorsal stripe. 15:46, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Clovertail (W) - Tweaked
OA was Bbun, with a tweak by myself. Tweaked to match Birchstar's color. <span style="">19:47 Tue May 22

Smooth out the shading a lot and add the white back leg farthest from us. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 20:38, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (KP) - Redone
OA was (I believe) Mounty, redone to match <span style="">19:49 Tue May 22

Do you need the file? Her stripes fades at her paler parts and her face stripes aren't as thick, and they circle around her face and muzzle. There should be pale parts around her legs and face-muzzle. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 20:37, May 22, 2018 (UTC)

http://tinypic.com/r/66lu2x/9 This is what it looks like with no shading. Which I'm gonna be redoing cause it looked gross lol. So the pale parts are definitely there. <span style="">21:54 Tue May 22

Ahh. I see. Just ignore the stripes comment, but the face yes. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 22:17, May 22, 2018 (UTC)