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Morningflower (Ki) ~ For Approval
How do you people charart?? How the **** did I charart??????? How did I kit blank? o.O

Did you have the file? I got the file from Fox a while back if you need it :) 13:13, 9/05/2016

Nope lmao I completely forgot there even was a thing called files and just absolutely screwed this into a mess xP it'd be great if you can send the files to saito.yukina@gmail.com ^^

Sent! 13:48, 9/05/2016

re-ups Received~thx ummm.... that's... not a lot of layers

Define the shading? It's a little hard to make out. 19:03, 9/07/2016

re-ups I thought it looked fine on my screen, but it this better now?

Comments???

Violetpaw (A) - For Approval
Precious magpie-kitty. All colors are from the kit file.

Define the light source? On the legs/paws the shading is on the right, but on the head and shoulder it seems to be on the left.

she's gonna need amber eyes too, jayce. 15:13, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

She's also supposed to be white with black splotches. This seems to be the other way around. 03:07, September 7, 2016 (UTC)

seems fine to me, especially with the kit included. also with the rogue to be I've seen it's very much more white than black. 03:11, September 7, 2016 (UTC)

Yup, there's more white than black, but I can tweak the pattern on parts not visible on the kit tomorrow if that works?

Precious kitty. Anyways add some more shading. -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 07:01, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

To be honest, I think the shading is fine. It just looks like there's not a lot because Violet's a black-and-white kitty. 12:43, 9/08/2016

Re-uploaded. The source is fine, as all of my apprentices posted before this have the same shading source, and absolutely no one has made me change it before now. I think it's because of the darkness of her pelt. I also tweaked the pattern in places that mean I wouldn't have to tweak the kit.

Whorlpaw (App) - For Approval
Lily thorn  00:31, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

he needs to be longhaired. 01:21, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

ignore that 01:21, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

Can you possibly make the texture on the shoulder a bit more "in the fur direction"( wth does that even mean )? Right now it's just diagonal lines across.

'''Reuploaded. '''I wasn't very happy with his overall texture so I redid it. I also darkened the shading a bit. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   13:16, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

I see a line next to the ear xP I don't know what it is, but it's gone when you click into the image??? Am I the only one who sees that line o.O

Oh! yes it was a line, it was one of these '/'. Whoops. Removed it. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   15:28, September 6, 2016 (UTC)

Possibly add some more shading on the belly? 12:44, 9/08/2016

Reuploaded.  ~P   a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   13:50, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

I meant the spot where there's no shading :P In your lightsource, it would be shrouded in shadow. The spot right next to the back leg. 13:56, 9/08/2016

Reuploaded. Oh, okay. I think I got it this time. Should I lightning it a bit? ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   14:57, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

This should be "For Approval"; getting an image approved is not required to advance from kit to apprentice. You just gotta know what you're doing.

Brighten the white a little bit. I know that it is in the shadow, especially on the belly, but images tend to get nominated for tweaks due to the white looking too gray. Set the white on the image to pure white and then take the shading layer and go over the white in a slightly lighter tone. That tends to fix it. It looks really gray in some areas right now. The shading darkness is perfect, just lighten the white. 15:06 Thu Sep 8

Reuploaded. I didn't even realize I was an apprentice! anyway, is that good, or should I lightening it a tad more? I also added a bit more texture to the belly. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   18:32, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Flowerpaw (SC) (App.) ~ For Approval
01:17 Tue Sep 6

The shading's seeking from the.... butt/hind leg/tail area, and can you unblur the shading overall to define the shading and light source a bit more?^^

Excuse me if I'm mistaken, but isn't she supposed to be silver? This looks relatively close to a darker gray. 03:27, 9/06/2016

Re-uploaded 00:32 Wed Sep 7

I think possibly get rid of some shading? It's really hard to make out the silver on multiple screens. Also, if possible, define your lightsource and possibly lighten the shading a tad. 00:38, 9/07/2016

The base still looks incredibly dark for a silver/silver-gray cat. 15:08 Thu Sep 8

Re-uploaded 23:17 Thu Sep 8

Could you define the light on the image?

Re-uploaded 23:20 Fri Sep 9

Define the light on the legs, tail, and face. 18:13, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:59 Sat Sep 10

I'm still having a hard time making out your lightsource. I firmly believe you should still erase some shading. <span style="">01:14, 9/11/2016

Sorry but I don't get it. I've already added more light and erased/lightened the shading a lot. Where should I erase the shading from? <span style="">01:45 Sun Sep 11

Hmm...well, first off, where is your lightsource coming from? If it's from where I presume, then possibly erase shading on <== side of the face, add shading on ==> side of the face, erase some shading on <== side of front chest, and <== side of all legs; add a tiny bit more shading on the ==> sides of all the legs, as there wouldn't be a lot of light shining there, and possibly some on the tail, too? I also see quite a bit of leaking shading around the image. Sorry if this is a lot ^^; <span style="">02:33, 9/11/2016

Nightpaw (RC) (App) ~ For Approval
I don't really like how the shading turned out on this... Took colors from kit

Can you define shading on the shoulder and hind leg a bit more?

A lot of the shading appears to be leaking. Also, could you define the shading depth as well as smooth out the shading some more? <span style="">19:00, 9/07/2016

Reuploaded

Comments?

Smooth out the shading and smudge the ear pink in --> ear a bit.

Pretty sure he needs a gray nose 07:18, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Tigerheart (D) ~ For Approval
All colors from warrior, from what I picked off of it. Also, is it just me, or does this look too light to be considered dark brown? <span style="">18:55, 9/07/2016

I honestly think it's fine... Me too, (Bluedragon64 (talk) 03:52, September 8, 2016 (UTC)).

It's fine, this is darker than Brokenstar, and that is still considered dark brown. Anywho, define the shading on the legs? <span style="">15:12 Thu Sep 8

Re-uploaded This is honestly as much as I can define the shading on the legs. <span style="">15:48, 9/11/2016

Honeypaw (VS) (A) ~ For Approval
I screwed up on the splotches and eyes, I'll fix them when I can. Also, morale: don't close down your computer without closing your tabs, as you could lose important work...like this post. --

Neon, you're supposed to wait until the image you had first is archived before putting another one up. <span style="">11:53, 9/08/2016

It's fine, everyone is allowed one time. That being said, this should be "for approval", since you already posted at least one image before.

Smudge the earpink, smudge the shading and lighten it?  ~ Silver Cloud ~   14:51, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, in that case, could you smooth out the yellow splotches some? <span style="">15:07, 9/08/2016 15:07, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the stripes just a little bit? They are very hard to see. They aren't incredibly dark on the kit, but they are more visible than they are here if that makes any sense. <span style="">15:14 Thu Sep 8

needs a white pixel in each eye. 18:37, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups I tried putting the lines on another layer so I could attack the splotches with my blurring tool viciously make more blurs without ruining the stripes. --

Can you blur the shading more? <span style="">06:42 Fri Sep 2016

Just curious as to know why there's tabby fur in her ear? <span style="">22:28, 9/09/2016

Because... | does? Reupload --

Smooth out the shading you have, and add some to the front leg closest to us and the tail. 18:11, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add/define tail shading. --  22:58, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

The ear pink seems really neon so maybe darken it a little? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:58, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload Me: "I'll try to watch some of ZSlyzer's Spirit of Justice Playthrough!" >27 20-30 minute episodes in 4 days Me: "crap I have loads of time-wasting to do" And that, my friends, was the story of why, I wasnt working. --

Beenose (Star) ~ For Approval
Dunno if she really died but there she is 19:48, September 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the texture? <span style="">21:54, 9/08/2016

Re-ups 12:13, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Juniperclaw (Ro) ~ For Approval
man its been forever — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:04, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. ~P  a   t   c   h    f   e   a   t   h   e   r~   20:34, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

The shading I used is pure black. Its the darkest, at 100% and blurred and all. Could I get some more comments on that? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 04:02, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

define doesn't mean darken, it means make more visible. Which reminds me, I can't see a source with this and the shading kinda seems all over the place. Did you use a different image as a reference?

No, the light slur e comes from the left. It's similar to the rogue images I looked at for examples which was Tigerstar and someone else, can't remember them rn. — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:56, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

I think maybe reduce the chest shading some and it's fine. 03:13, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Tree (Lo) ~ For Approval
Comments? 22:07, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad more? And forgive if I'm mistaken, but do yellow cats get tabby stripes? I don't think they would, but again, just ignore me if I'm wrong. <span style="">22:26, 9/09/2016

Reuploaded. I always thought of yellow cats as being similar to golden cats, where, if the artist chooses to, they can add stripes, even if they're not described as tabbies. However, if others disagree with me, I'll remove them. 22:41, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Where does it say that golden cats can have optional stripes? I know it's like that for speckled/flecked cats like Ashfur and Ferncloud, but I don't ever remember it being like that on golden...although I do believe that yellow is actually a shade of ginger. Which would also mean golden is a shade of ginger, I think... but that's neither here nor there. The stripes can stay, imo.

Anyways, define the facial shading and lighter areas; it appears kinda flat and takes up a lot of the face.

Reuploaded. 15:17, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Possibly define the depth of shading a tad? This looks great, Bluestar! <span style="">01:15, 9/11/2016

Reuploaded. Thanks. 01:24, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Nettle (VS) (Ro) ~ For Approval
Ehhh  <span style="">22:27 Fri Sep 9 

Maybe define the tail shading and the shading on the right paw furthest from us

Make him a bit browner, as he looks slightly gray-brown to me. Overall though, you did a great job! 22:43, September 9, 2016 (UTC)

Unless it specifies a shade of brown, which it does not in this case, his coloring is just fine. There's nothing that says it can't be gray-brown, creamy-brown, dark brown, light brown, or even just a neutral brown, or a reddish-brown (not as vibrant as pinestar or Red Claw, but you get my point). Shade is artist's choice unless one is clearly stated.

reups did some fiddling too  <span style="">07:53 Sat Sep 10 

Strikestone (W) - For Approval
So beautifully overly complicated. <span style="">22:47 Fri Sep 9

define the tail shading? 14:25, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also redid the eyes/eye color and messed with the colors to make the stripes/markings a little easier to see. <span style="">20:17 Sat Sep 10

Breezepaw (RC) (A) - For Approval
art iz hard 01:34, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Thicken the stripe that goes across the entire neck a little bit. Do you want the file for the kit? There's also a texture on this as well, that I don't think you got.

White looks gray in most places. 19:03, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:17, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Minor things, but on the kit there wasn't a stripe on the white tail tip, and also the backs of the ears were lighter.

Reuploaded 07:03, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Alderheart (MC) - For Approval
So I'm not sure if this is my image, if it's not I apologize, just decline it. 18:05, September 10, 2016 (UTC)

Define ear pink just a tad and could you smudge the shading some — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 02:02, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:34, September 11, 2016 (UTC)

Puddleshine (MCA) - For Approval
Round two on this one. ^^ I'm pretty happy with this. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:37, September 11, 2016 (UTC)