Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 70

Harley (Alt. R) - Approved
At el  da  21:51, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

He was actually described as gray-black so that would be just dark gray. Night shine  22:15, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

This would be declined then, wouldn't it? 05:26, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ I don't think so, because he's originally brown and grey. I just messed up on the coloring XD. At el  da  16:29, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think Nightshine meant that it just had to be a solid dark gray. No patches or anything. 18:26, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, mkay. :3 18:43, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so I'm somewhat confused. Is he grey and black or just solid grey? At el  da  22:48, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Solid dark gray. 23:09, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ At  el  da  00:20, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could be more consistent; there's highlighting on the bottom/chest area as well as the back, so where's the light source? xD 00:24, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the back a bit *Canyonsong* *Warrior Of Fireclan*  02:29, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Figure out your light source and change the shading; right now it doesn't really make sense. There's no visible light source. Blur all the shading as mentioned above, and make your earpink a bit smaller. 207.81.88.82 03:15, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me ^^ I keep on getting signed out. 03:31, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ not sure if it's showing up or not... btw, I smudged and blurred it as much as I could on pixlr without messing it up. At el  da  04:05, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading doesn't make any sense, where's your light source? 18:27, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok sorry uploaded the wrong one. The light source is now right in front. At el  da  21:26, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Harley.rogue.alt.png 17:36, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and maybe see Nightshine's tutorial? It shows how to do the shading/highlights and light source... 21:45, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ At  el  da

Blur the highlights. Great job! 22:12, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ I'm being really indecisive with the shading, experimenting. At el  da  16:47, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights/shading and lighten the whole image a tad. It looks black now, he's supposed to be gray-black. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:10, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Ok I lightened the image, and blurred it as much as pixlr would let me. ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:01, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look kind of unnatural. Make them more oval-shaped, maybe? xP 20:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest having a light source from behind, It doesn't look natural to have little spots of highlights. 20:59, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Sorry, internet has been down, but so I did this one on GIMP but I also did one with the light source behind. So...does this shading look good or should I put up the one with the light souce behind? ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 20:00, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more reddish, the current color is hard to see. ~ Mis teh ~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life...  22:45, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good, but the highlights are too light, the earpink should be reddened, and the shading should be blurred. The eyes should also be darkened. Nice work, though! 16:24, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think the highlights are the right shade, but blur them a ton, along with the shading, darken the eyes, smudge earpink, maybe add a tiny bit of highlight on his <- ear, and there's a white pixel on his nose. Wait, is that white pixel supposed to be there? I dunno. Good job.- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 09:54, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the bottom part of the tail. 20:51, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is faded, it needs to be block pink and then blurred. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 12:39, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Harley.rogue.alt.png. 19:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok. 23:38, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 17:34, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:15, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The eye looks kind of odd to me. It's kinda... i don't know... boxy? :P Or it could be just me :P 13:10, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Ok, done! 22:41, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading 21:52, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Comments? 17:41, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a bit on the bottom part? 18:59, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~ Of course! 19:05, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it just a little. 19:59, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ok I lightened it, and I've blurred it without trying to blur the lineart. 03:16, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch the shading up the tail to where the hind legs and the tail touch and darken the ear-pink a tad. This is looking good. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 21:52, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I switched with Atelda, so I'm taking over Harley now. I don't know if it looks any difference, but I darkened the ear-pink a bit. @Scarletwind - What do you mean by stretching the shading up to the tail? I'm a bit confused. 03:19, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Rainwillow! Blur the shading a bit though. 06:53, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @ Willow: You should have said it looked good to Atelda. She was the one who originally had this reserved. xD Anyways, comments? 07:04, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the muzzle ;) 14:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The darkest shading looks too dark, lighten it a tad. Make it a much smoother transition between light and dark, currently it's very harsh. 14:45, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. Anyways, does it look better? 02:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

There appears to be a 'stripe' inbetween the shading and highlights. Smooth that area out. 02:59, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't know what you meant by the stripe, so I just blurred the shading and highlights. Anything else? 03:03, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Commenting on my use-to-be-mine charart xD. Blur the earpink a bit, the hindleg shading looks a bit odd. There is a darker spot on it. The bottem of that same hindleg looks a bit lighter too. Make the eye color more green too. (glad I switched this to you) Nice job though, better than me! 04:08, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Now? 06:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little more triangular. Looks almost ready! :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 11:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I made the earpink a bit triangular. Comments? 13:33, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! darken the nose color. 16:34, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Anything else? 03:05, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Not for me, awesome job on my fail! 03:09, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The nose still looks a bit funny. I think it's just cause the shading's dark over there. Maybe lighten it a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 03:24, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''How does it look? 04:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the earpink a little. 11:01, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look a little abrupt; blend them into the pelt a bit more. Also, darken the ear pink :3 11:39, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Paleclaw! =D I will go blur the earpink later..... 11:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 16:29, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks wonderful, Rainy! Can you make the nose black, though? :3 22:14, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest and bring the highlights down on the shoulder and flank so it rounds. It might be easier to show you with a redline. Sorta, stretch them down and round the bottoms so it looks a bit more 3-D. I hope that made sense... xP Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 23:16, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I kinda redid the shading. Does it look okay? I still have the old version of this image, so if this doesn't look better, I can upload the older image. The changes aren't showing yet though....Comments? 07:47, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Pinken the ear pink a tad. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 14:56, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

If I pinken the earpink some more, it'll look weird. I think it should stay the way it is. Anything else? 02:23, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking it the light source is on it's back? Can you darken up the highlights a tad? It...just seems awkward. 02:45, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think this looks even weirder.....Changes aren't showing. Comments? 04:04, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a tiny tiny bit. Leo pard  claw I’m a  warrior  now! 08:05, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I tried lightening the earpink a tiny tiny bit, but it still looked the same, and when I just lighten it, it looks to bright. I'm just going to leave it the way it is. 12:43, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else? Comments? 03:05, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a tad. And, is the shading/highlights in the right places for the light source you've chosen, on the tail? They probably are, so, just lighten the tail shading a tiny bit. Maybe blur the shading and highlights together on the tail a bit.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 05:40, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't know if the changes are showing............. 05:07, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great. CBA? :3 16:17, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but I think that the ear pink is too light for the pelt color. Darken it just the tiniest bit, than it's perfect! 18:29, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do it right now. 21:47, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Frankly, I think the earpink looks fine. 22:18, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

So do I darken it or just leave it? 22:19, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It looks just fine. Don't touch it. =) 22:31, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Then I'll leave it the way it is...... 22:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah it looks fine. Repeating CBA. 20:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Considering nothing was changed, I'm approving this. Darkhallows  Enter the cave? 07:06, August 23, 2011 (UTC)