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Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg

as a head's up, go ahead and start matching the pale blue-gray shade you see in the old one's prior revisions, we're swapping her and Mistystar to be pale due to a LS cite, per PC

'''Reuploaded! ''' Is this the right one? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  23:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add just a little more light to the muzzle, specifically on << side of the face, as its in more light?

With your source, I think the top part of your >tail wohld be in light as it has shading on too to bottom and that doesn't make since with the source so if you could fix that  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:45, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little light to the top of the paws 04:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There are also three pixels of waste between the hind paw and the front <--- paw. 22:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading depth to the haunch, it still comes off as flat-ish imo compared to the rest of the image

Still working?

14:32, June 16, 2019 (UTC) Yes sorry i just finished finals!! I'll upload asap -Shadow   hOnK :o)  04:21, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

There's three pixels of waste underneath the tail, and could you maybe define the earpink? 22:47, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Ambermoon (Alt K) - CBA
love the new blanks. Very cute 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand shading  Ellie  life is an illusion 01:17, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:48, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the tail from the haunch shading. 01:09, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  02:02, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading. 16:13, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define it some when you do expand it  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:11, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's always shading... you'd think I'd know how to do it by now 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source- where is the light coming from? 19:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's coming from the left--where her face is. How would you emphasize that? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

With that, there shoud be no shading on the top of the tail. 22:52, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

To add to Potato's comment, to make it as coming to face, there wouldn't be any shading on the < side of the haunch either, the shading on the bottom of the tail would extend to the tailtip, there'd be more on the > side of the arm, and some extending to the chin.

Reuploaded Completely redid shading. With my luck, probably made it worse, but, whatever 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Switch your haunch shading to the other side. 20:14, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needn’t go so high up the backbone. Also - the haunch is unshaded. Should be some to form the shape of the bum; kinda how it is on some of the other images around.

The shading needs expanded quite a bit  Ellie  life is an illusion 21:28, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --mutters something incoherent about shading-- 02:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

the tail shading could be expanded a bit more.

03:08, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

The shading still goes too far up the back

Reuploaded Fixing the back was harder than I anticipated... 03:22, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I believe, since we're matching former images, that the base on this needs to be slightly lighter and the white more smooth and less defined

I color-picked off the original... 02:39, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

I checked as well, when I commented. Yours, is the darker of the two color swatches, from a spot with no highlights.

Reuploaded Fixed it--maybe 03:24, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:26, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Appledawn (W) ~ CBA
It's the only one of the set, so there's nothing I have to be matching, right? I also don't know if I'm happy with the eyes or texture... 00:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

We recently agreed to match the old images, so this would have to match the old warrior. But I think the colors match close enough with the exception of the eye color and ear pink...the stripes should be curlier. 01:04, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading and shading depth?

Define the light and the pupil in the eye 02:22, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be a bit thicker.  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:39, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, that was painful. Am I allowed to keep the texture? I don't think the old one had any... 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It did not have texture, as far as I'm aware.

Do I have to remove it, then? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It does have to match the old image, so yeah

Reuploaded Well, that's annoying that I wasted so much time w/ the texture, but at least it's easy to undo 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, and expand it on the back?

Reuploaded One of these days I'll know how to do shading... 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Practice makes perfect! With this source, there would not be shading on  >> that side of the haunch. There would also be shading on the top of the most visible hind leg, and the bottom tail shading where the tail touches the ground would be on the top part, not the bottom. 04:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading from the flank leaking onto the top of the haunch. Could you add depth to the hind leg and foot, along with the front legs? Perhaps expand the shading on the front leg and connect it to the shoulder too? If you're trying to match the original image, I think the stripes could stand to be a bit more... wavy? I'm not sure what word to use to describe it. The earpink in <- ear looks a little duller than what you have in the other, it looks a little off. This image is turning out great! 18:25, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded And the autopsy reveals: Death by shading! As for the other comments: 1. Could I please have a second opinion before I redo the stripes again? 2. The earpink in both ears is the same, but the shading tint is throwing off the left ear, and I'm open to suggestions on how to fix that. 02:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

the earpink is leaking

03:08, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

The stripe pattern doesn't match the prior image, so that does need to be fixed. Whether you tweak what you have or redo them is up to you - whatever gets it there

Reuploaded Third times's a charm! Now I know why I've never done tabbies that already had some done... I'm honestly not sure this came out any better 03:22, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste at the very end of the <--- curve of the tail. 22:44, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded that's an easy fix at least 15:44, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes appear a bit softer and the eye color a tad lighter. 01:17, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

On mine or the original? 02:39, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and smudge the pelt into the earpink 04:14, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded fixed eyes, ears, and stripes. Might've fixed shading, I'm not really sure... 03:24, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the earpink on the former image was lighter... which helped it not clash as much. It was under shading in that image, so colorpicking from the shaded part would have given you what you've got here; but, I do think it should be lightened. I also think you could slide a few more thin stripes into the haunch with the gaps apparent to make them closer together.

Reuploaded Matching images is hard 03:12, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

You're almost there. Just things. The << earpink is obscured by the shading;; try to still make it visible beneath; and add a little shading to the > ear

Reuploaded 02:18, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Cora (W) - CBA
Same source as Cloversplash. Comments? 01:05, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! I forgot her bitten ear, I'll add that in a moment. 01:06, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:20, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I know you're using clover's source but the shading could be smoothed a bit more.

12:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

honestly, it could be smoothed a lot. its too hard edged  Ellie  life is an illusion 13:27, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:51, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again tweaked things about the ears. 17:59, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the pupils look more like pupils and not a black line that goes through her eyes  Ellie  life is an illusion 11:42, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pupil change. 22:29, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could stand to be smoothed some more on the shoulder and haunch. 00:24, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:45, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

the nose color seems duller on the other images, and the others also show the ear to have a small bit deeper of a V shape than is here (looking to queen, is relatively facing frontwards)

Reuploaded *grabs a pair of scissors and trims away*  21:35, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the legs.

14:36, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:40, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:25, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnflower (K) - For Approval
We're back, baby. I changed a few things, including the shading and adding the small gap in the haunch that I forgot before. I'll upload her warrior tommorow. Comments? 02:04, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, especially around the cheek bone and smudge/blur the earpink into a pelt some so it's not such a perfect straight line 02:21, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

expand and smooth the haunch, please.

05:38, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth all the shading  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded this is as far I'm willing to go with the face shading, as my source doesn't call for it to go all the way up the cheekbone. 22:37, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Where would the source be from, then? The seems very close to one of the two typical sources we see here - in all but the cheekbone. Unless other things give, what is here does call for it to connect, as Scarlet said.

The source is Baykit's. I'll reupload in a moment. 23:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Since your using Baykit's source, the facial shading corves all the way down so you would need to do as Scarlet said. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:13, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:00, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink a little more into the pelt? It still looks like a straight line,

Also, as an addition, can you connect the jaw shading to the chest? With this source, that should all be shadow.

Reuploaded  23:55, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Considerong you haunch shading isn't expanded much can you either expamd that or recede the tail shadinf <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:52, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded fixing the shading. This looks better. 23:46, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the forepaws and tailtip. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:56, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

fill in shading at the base of the arm, where it appears to be leaking from the lineart

Reuploaded  21:38, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the underside of the tail and haunch, the transition's still pretty blunt 04:17, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smudge my shading. I hope this looks better. 16:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

So I was discussing this with a few other people and wanted to bring something up. I think the tint of the shading should be dulled. And yes, I fully realize we leave the tint up to the artist most times, but not in cases where it interferes with set matchability. This looks nice on it's own, but I've put it with the others in the set, and it clashes and makes the images appear incongruent. It can obviously still retain some form of tint, but something not quite as prominent, in my opinion, so that the set meshes well.

Reuploaded No, I understand. 23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Cool great. I believe the shading could stand to be lightened some, and it's leaking away from the lineart at the bottom of where the arm hits the tail; both in that elbow crease and where it meets the tail tip. The shading at the side of the cheek, given this source, similar to how you've got it on Blackstar/Bluebellkit

Reuploaded rip cheek shading  02:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the face.

14:36, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:47, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink color here seems duller and less saturated than the app and queen, which came before the elder that has the lighter shade

Reuploaded colorpicked from the queen  20:46, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

This is definitely getting close, and good job keeping up with it. Here's a little something for you; red is waste, blue is little bits of shading that should be removed that are leaking over from whenever they were smoothed - but as are, contradict the source; green is little bits of shading that still remain sharp, and thus could be smoothed.

Reuploaded woohoo  00:51, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the tail shading, and recede how high it goes on that front arm's upper section (it needn't go higher than the eye, really)

Reuploaded  22:24, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The arm hasn't been receded at all - the revision history doesn't show it. The tail shading is also pretty much just as sharp as before

Reuploaded didn't like the shading so I changed the light source and tinted it blue. The source is Wrenkit's.  00:59, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Why did you change the shading placement? I get that it's artist's choice, but the other source was so close to being done. Smooth the haunch shading and recede the shading on the face. It shouldn't be covering that much space. 01:15, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Same as my comment on the warrior

Reuploaded Well.. idk what to say except I'm very very very picky on light sources. I went back to the one I had before, but kept the blue shading. Now thinking about it, I like this source better. 02:40, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Missiing the connecting cheek shading here - per logic in prior comments, it does need to be there.

Reuploaded  21:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste it seems under the front paws

Bramblestar (W) - For Approval
Another broad-shouldered dark brown tabby tom in the books. But he's the nice one :) Hopefully I gave Icy's Bramblestar some justice. 02:05, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a touch more and define the light on the tail 03:43, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Dsfine the shading on the paler parts I cant see it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:47, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

is the pale area -> actually part of the chest? on other images it seems to be the leg.

I meant that to be a part of the chest, but I see what you're talking about now... should I change it? 15:34, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Personally I would, most images so far have been treating that as a front leg

Can you fill in the space between the legs?

Additionally, for reference, doing something similar to Apple Blossom, Star Flower, or Quick Water for the pale chest. 20:19, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

The hind paw furthest from us isn't filled in, and I'm having trouble seeing the shading in general. 23:07, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:03, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly remove the pale from the > shoulder. That doesn't look like thats a piece kf the chest. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:55, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading, and desaturate the tint of it a little? It's giving off a cool effect, but I can't see it very well for such a dark cat, and the tint is throwing the colors off compared next to the set

Smudge the pelt into the earpink 04:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yes, sorry! I've had a really busy past few days. It'll be up today. 19:58, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I have to say I liked it better with the saturated tint... 20:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay that's a bit better. I made a compromise version that used a little tint but did not have a profound effect on the base colors. 20:24, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I think there are too many tail stripes? It seems very crowded here than the other images. And they're not exactly all linear (up and down); some are supposed to be cross hatched like the apprentice and leader. And the stripes on the lower haunch seem a tad sharper, too, towards their ends. 00:37, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 15:47, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the tail's dorsal stripe? I'm having trouble making it out

Reuploaded. *panting from effort* 15:37, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Almost there :P I do believe, though, that the scar that runs across his shoulder would show on the >> side and run into the pale; kinda in the same location in height as the leader - since that cite is from just barely before he's made deputy, it'd count.

Birchbark (K) - For Approval


05:23, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, also this really good omg <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:48, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Also thicken the shading behind and the elbow into the crease at the belly 21:22, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Same as above^^

Reuploaded i hate shading with a passion

02:48, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the belly shading just a bit to match the transition the other bits have. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded i tried

02:29, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth just a tad more <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Tbh it looks fine.

13:07, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

The shading to the stomach and arm are more rough than the other areas. I don't think it would hurt to smooth just so it would match? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:32, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

i think it could be smoothed out 15:14, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded i tried

01:14, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the shading behind the foreleg and belly some more 04:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

05:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

It's still pretty sharp in the areas Scarlet mentioned

Reuploaded 08:03, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Appledusk (W) ~ For Approval
These new blanks are awesome!<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:02, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reupload Of course I only notice my shading issues the moment I upload.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:14, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

With your source, there should be less shading on the tail, could you lessen that some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:37, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

I had this issue with the other images... but I really think his base looks extremely greenish in tint. I think we should perhaps tweak his images to match the color of his official website icon.

Define the shading inside the ears and on the face 04:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reupload I'm not quite sure where exactly on the tail should I remove shading. Is the new edits what you mean Ellie? Also thanks Snowed for providing the image for me!<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:50, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry, I feel the tail shading in that section in which it was removed needs to be added back. To me, Mink's comment meant to recede how much of the tail the shading covers, because it covers too much, so add some light to the tail, therefore receding the shading. But, it shouldn't have been removed from the < section entirely, as it now contradicts the source.

Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more.

can you define the eye depth? <span style="">02:15 Wed Jun 12

Dsfine the light source in the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened the shading depth  21:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shading on the haunch and < front arm is sharp, and there's waste outside the > front leg

Reuploaded tfw you realize you haven't been using a hard-edged smudge tool and using a soft tool that makes the shading look bad  23:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shading along the arm and face so that it doesn’t look flat?

Reuploaded  16:03, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Same as I said on Dawnflower's kit, though more especially here.

Reuploaded  23:19, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit.

14:38, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:48, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some light to the chest and legs, add some depth so it doesn't seem flat like it is on the legs and chest area <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:41, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll add light to the chest and shading depth, but Mink, this is the exact same way the legs are on the source I mentioned above, with the exception of the bounce light. 16:04, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did the things I mentoned. 16:06, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Still looks flat, and should also be made to curve on the face instead of go in a line straight down. Also, same comment for the earpink color as on the kit

I get there shouldn't be light down there since I've used this source before, but it shouldn't look so flat as it is does. There should be depth. Adding some shading light should help add depth to the lighter parts of the shading there as well as some darker bits, like Blackstar has. The haunch is also leaking <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:51, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the light source to Bouncefire's.  20:42, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch could be swooped downward to encompass the curve (basically putting the shading on the lower haunch and connecting it), and removing some from the tail tip because there wouldn't be as much. 21:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:25, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, it should be on the bottom of the tail, iirc. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:01, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire's source has the shading on top of the tail, not the bottom. 14:06, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bouncefire is a tabby, its not seen as prominent as this. As some others have probably said. One shading on another character might not work for another. The source contradicts the shading on the tail, it should be on the bottom as its inconsistent with it on the top. It doesn't make sense when the light is coming from > and the shading is where there should be light. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:55, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The shading can also be smoothed, too. 21:11, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploadeddddd again fixing a few things. 22:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

that bit thats still on the top should be curveddown as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded herpaderpderp  22:46, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

That's not what I meant, I'll give a redline inna minute. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

here, this is basically what im getting from you shading source so i did a redline. As well as fixing that, lighten and smooth your shading. It could use quite a bit of smoothing <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:25, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed the tint to blue. I like this one better. 00:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Curve up the haunch shading so it shows off the shape of the thigh. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded rip I tried  01:07, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the line of shading going across the thigh. I think what Mink was referring to was curving the shading downward to encompass the bottom of the thigh. And smooth the shading, too. 01:10, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think the best way for the shading to go is to have a look at the updated shading chart, as it shows the two most common sources that users have been using for the warrior blanks + kits.

Reuploaded double rip, matched to tutorials. 02:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the over all shading a bit, then on the back line art the shading is very faint, define that? 15:43, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

That spot of shading still looks fairly light compared with the rest of the shading, making it look inconsistent. Could you make it match in depth more? I think the depth could be defined on both front legs and the face - perhaps expand it to go under the chin? Smooth it by the bend in the tail, it looks blotchy, and the haunch and shoulder shading could be smoothed some more as well. 23:45, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix the shading more tomorrow. 01:28, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (K) - For Approval


22:04, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

saturate the earpink? <span style="">22:19 Thu Jun 13

Smooth the tummy/shoulder shading a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:26, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i tried

01:27, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the tail stripes just a touch more 04:22, June 15, 2019 (UTC)\

reuploaded

04:50, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The midsection shading that's alongside the haunch is leaking away from the lineart

Reuploaded 08:03, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Deerleap (W) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:38, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes should be tapered some. 16:56, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think that very thick stripe on the very end of the tail shouldn't be quite so wide, compared to the other images

Reuploaded Sorry for the delay. Also not sure why but the approval and charart pages are acting up. Sometimes they don't load, at least for me. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:14, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

For lack of better words, the stripe color seems to pop off the base a lot more than it does on the other images. It's almost like the stripes are either very very slightly lighter or smoothed in more

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:08, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Tabby tom ~ CBA


Add a little bit of variation to the stripes so they're a little less uniform? Can you also smooth out the shading on > that ear and the chest? 01:09, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

reups thinned out some stripes but i did more or less have the intention of them being uniform

maybe define the shading a bit, mainly on the haunch and lower legs as well as the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:38, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

reups

The stripes still seem very rigid. Perhaps try to curve them to fit the contour of the body? 01:28, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reups i tried

CBA?

Sandstorm (Alt W 4) ~ For Approval
<span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:55, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Think there's some leaking shading on the hind paw furthest from us, and on top of the <--- front paw. 01:35, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

I'll take a look in a bit but that lightness on the hind paw is a bit of light. As the cat is sitting down so a small amount of light would most likely make it onto there however I can cover it all in shading if need be but I do have light on that area with the other cats I've used this source with. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

If you've used this source before and the light on the hind paw was there, then it's fine. It just seemed like leaking at a quick glance lol. 17:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, I totally get it. It's the same source as Shellfur, Cedarstar, and Blackstar. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:18, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The base, when compared, is darker than the rest of the alt set

The texture doesn't seem to matchup to her set either. The texture should be white, is it? Both the Que and App had it drawn on in plain white and then opacity adjusted. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 16:11, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, yeah it is white. I'll play with it on my next re-up. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:16, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the back paw

Smudge the earpink and expand the shading more on the tail, it's a tad flat there. I also think the shading on the back leg is leaking onto the tail. 21:33, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, redid it. All colors from the apprentice. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:10, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the transition on top of the back leg, the shoulder, and the tail? It looks like solid lines at the moment, while in other spaces you have a really smooth transition.

Could you redline the areas, possibly. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:27, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

In these areas, also the nose isn't filled in too.

Sol (Alt L) ~ CBA
02:00, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

I love this.. CBA?

I'll likely slap this right back under, but I did notice there's some placement differences from the KP that could be altered a little bit. I think the white on both paws/lower legs could be receded a bit, and that the lowest black stripe on the > front arm should be thicker. At least on the < half of the cat, the neck should be ginger, and that a good bit of the chest should be ginger too. For a last bit, the KP's earpink also seems lighter, but if that's just a difference in shading/style of applying it, ignore that bit.

reuploaded 23:21, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

SkyClan's Destiny gray she-cat (W) ~ For Evaluation
My first canon charart. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 07:37, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading please? also there was a thumb on your image so i removed it :)

10:32, June 15, 2019 (UTC) whoops sorry for the double comment. the eyelashes should be removed as they are not in use to define gender anymore

10:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Soften up the texture a bit to match her kittypet. Good work! 13:26, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 13:46, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumb the image by going into source mode and removing the |left. Make the pupils less of a square, add eyeshine, and define the shading on the hind feet. 14:11, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Changed the heading from approval to evaluation since you're still a kit^^ Smooth the shading on the legs and flank, and there appears to be shading leaking from the chest and leg farthest from us, then add some to the ears. Nice job on this! 14:31, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes look like there's still lashes, that part shouldn't be there iirc <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:10, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 08:27, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the < front leg to remove the blotchiness, and you've got some waste outside the back

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:16, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, the back paw farthest from us would have some shading, though not completely in shadow. 20:57, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

The eye color also seems different than the kittypet. Nice job doing the texture btw! 00:39, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 14:41, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and darken everywhere 23:34, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

There would be a little shading under the jaw with this source, and define the shading on the hind paw farthest from us. This may just be my screen, but there might be waste under the paws. 01:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (W) - CBA
Wanted to do just a simple one, but I always underestimate solid colour cats :/  11:21, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Smooth that bit of shading at the base of the tail a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:30, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  15:42, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 16:27, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Timberfur (W) - For Approval
i didn't think i needed to make him graying since it came later in his life and the original image didn't have it. if the cite came earlier or something i can do it no problem <span style="">18:04 Sun Jun 16

There's a triangle of waste on <--- end of the tail, and a piece of line waste underneath the tail. The haunch shading can also be expanded just a bit. 19:59, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

^leg shading could also be expanded

reuploaded solid cats are a menace <span style="">02:46 Mon Jun 17

There's some waste under the tail, and given the source, I don't think the shading on the top of the tail on the < side (our view) is needed

reuploaded totally thought i got rid of the waste last upload but i got the wrong layer <span style="">03:44 Mon Jun 17

Smooth out the haunch shading?

reuploaded <span style="">20:18 Mon Jun 17

Could you add some more shading along the bottom of the tail? Mostly in that gap area. 22:50, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Correct me if qrong but with the light source. That bit of top tail shading should be removed up to about nearly the tip <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (RC) (W) - CBA
I remember liking him 19:32, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

I think the lineart has to match to Berrynose? I think it was decided that cats with similar line edits should use the same lineart. 20:54, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

It didn't go to a vote yet, and even then.. the discussion doesn't say anything about similar lineart edits that I can see. That only applies to cats in the same character image set, such as all of Raggedstar's, all of Brokenstar's, ect. This can be whatever Egg wants it to be.

Can you define the mottles? 00:44, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reup messed with the eye color too 18:54, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Alder (Ki) - For Approval
I think it's fine if I pick this back up? if its not lmk. I kind of stopped working bc i got sick and its hard for me to draw when I'm sick.. I still kind of am, but i'm feeling far better and so I created this demon. This time I got the original file for the kit. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:17, June 16, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste above the back <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:38, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups wasteus deletus <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up. Perhaps reupload again? 01:07, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

It's now showing up. 01:31, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - CBA
didn't know if i should have included his gray muzzle or not 00:08, June 17, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The cite's from when he was a warrior, so you're good ^^ Can you add a few more smaller stripes on the lower chest? He has some there on the apprentice. 00:42, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded alright cool :O 16:05, June 17, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you define the shading on the < front leg?

There seems to be some shading leaking onto the <front leg <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:32, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on his muzzle and <-- cheek 23:36, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:41, June 17, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA?

15:42, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt W) - CBA
i think i finally made something that doesnt look disgusting after 1 hour. i tried to colorpick the old one and referenced the stripes the best i could seeing how its different sides <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 00:56, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the back section of the tail? the section furthest from us 22:35, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 01:38, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

The eye white in the <<< eye looks gray with shading; could you make that pop out a bit?

reups <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 22:49, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 05:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Tansypaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
All colors from original image. Comments? 02:18, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

I think that the other images have slightly thinner tail stripes

Cute! Super minor, but could you connect the stripe over the eye? Her other images also have seven stripes on the tail, while this has only five, can you add two more? The stripes on this also appear to be a tiny bit darker than the rest of her images; is that just my screen? 23:30, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

They look darker as well. 23:37, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (K) ~ CBA
OA claim from Patch

could you make it so that the texture on the head doesn't go vertically, but rather along the direction of the fur?

Reuploaded

hm the overall effect still seems to be that the texture is flowing vertically. how does it look if you smudge the stripes along the direction of the fur?

Hmm. I fiddled with it for a good bit and couldn’t really come up with much. I’ve redrawn the texture there a few times, which ended with much the same is there now, and smudging the stripes more simply makes them softer than would work in the set.

CBA, then? 22:52, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Violet (KP) (W) - For Approval
oa claim given to me by patch, thank you

04:28, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

I think the white part should extend to reach the bottom of the chin when looking at the rogue. 15:31, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Can youbdefine the white, it looks more reddish gray atm <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 06:36, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Hawkheart (K) ~ For Approval
OA claim given to me by Patch.

04:37, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the facial shading some? So cute!

Could you darken the brown some? It looks darker on the other images. 16:22, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 06:37, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Brokenstar (W) - CBA
broken warrior's in his mohawk phase but srsly why do i do these things to myself? stole the face lineart from here 07:04, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

imo, I think he can be poofier, especially on the back (which might be the only place where you could do it). 15:29, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes could stand to be more orange (per that discussion a while ago we tweaked them to be so) so the leader/df is what most of them got turned to.

Re-uploaded 23:04, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Soo fluffy. 05:32, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. W2) - CBA
07:22, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

could you deepen the shading some? <span style="">02:11 Tue Jun 18

Re-uploaded 04:48, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 22:51, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Hailstar (K) - For Approval
insert obligatory comment about how this was my first image etc 12:21, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Is the darker gray parts shading or just patches? Could younpossibly recede it if its shading on the haunch and tail some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:40, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

reup there werent dark gray patches, it was rough shading. 02:47, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Speckletail (K) ~ CBA


CBA? 16:20, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Ivypool (W) ~ CBA
Hey it's your girl 15:44, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Are we doing Is now?

Ahh, I should've clarified that this was an OA claim given to me from Icy's warriors. Since I am the OA of the master design. My bad. 16:30, June 17, 2019 (UTC)


 * Not to reopen a can of worms, but do the ear tears have to match? 17:24, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

I beleive it was discussed that alts don't have to match the actual lineart and vice versa iirc. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:30, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

I did my best to match the queen’s torn ears but I am more than happy to go back and take a crack at it again. ^^ 17:37, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 18:54, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Gorseclaw (RC) (Ki) ~ CBA
20:10, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit? 00:04, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

I think that little bit that's showing of the back paw under the tail would be shaded, given the source, since the tail is on top of it and would cast shadow

Reuploaded 00:35, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 23:31, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Billystorm (W) ~ For Approval
haha ready for death 20:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

lighten the shading on the ginger <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:52, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

this is so pretty! could you define the shading slightly on the < inner ear? <span style="">02:10 Tue Jun 18

Reups 16:20, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Daisytoe (W) - For Approval
23:26, June 17, 2019 (UTC)

sharpen the mickeys a little?

Define the shading a bit on > this ear? Also, she looks a tad cross-eyed. 00:40, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. These are the same sort of eyes I've used on my other recent chararts, so unless someone else takes issue with them I'd rather not change them. 17:13, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes look fine to me. If you’ve used them before, then I don’t see a problem.

Squirrelflight (Alt W) - For Approval
oa claim, used vecs deputy file for everything <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:32, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

This looks good! There should be white on the belly and the stripes should be a bit more jagged and not a linear. What I did is use a small brush and brush tightly up and down across the blank. 16:08, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (K) ~ CBA
got the stripe pattern off the old warrior, which was same side

CBA? 03:29, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Brown and white kit ~ CBA
one of Sol’s littermates from SS-2; colors from recolored manga

CBA? 03:30, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfur (TC) (K) - For Approval
trash baby

Could you lighten the shading half a tick and recede it on the haunch? With this pattern in particular, it obscures the pattern a bit

reuploaded how's that?

Brindleface (K) - For Approval
matched to the old warrior's side

Poolcloud (W) - For Approval
i did this like 3 times to try to make it look right <span style="">18:06 Tue Jun 18

Cinderheart (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
Got everything from the withdrawn alt. warrior. 19:20, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add a touch of shading to the arm, above the tail? Just to connect it to the haunch, and to make the area look less flat.

Sunfish (Alt. W) - For Approval
Family tree alt. Colorpicked from her icon. 19:20, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt W) - For Approval
So, unless we start implementing a rule that states all alts need to match the main set, I technically do not need to add texture. I could give you at least five examples where some images in the character art galleries have texture, when some do not. tldr, I didn't want to add texture, so please do not tell me to add it based on rules we do not have.

Ivypool (K) ~ For Approval
Okay I'm back. 22:56, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Ki) - For Approval
I imagine that the tail's top part is facing us, kinda like what I did with File:Lightning Stripe.kit.png, where the dorsal stripe represents the top part of the tail. You wouldn't see any white from this vantage point. Also, this side intentionally has less coloring and more white than the other side, as seen by the rogue.. the ancient has too much black there, please disregard it and I'll fix it when I have the spare time.

Frecklewish (TC) (Alt. W) - CBA
literally blurred 10 pixels 23:12, June 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Littlecloud's alt was CBA'd basically instantly as well for this same kind of deal. There's no need to let this sit when nothing else needs to be done to this image, as another version was just approved. And yes, I did consult two other leads, one being Patch, before I CBA'd this.

Frostfur (W) - Declined
I know, there's a LOT of waste, but I'm trying to fix it. It's also my first image, so it's not the best.

I believe we're only doing A-Es right now

Oh.. I haven't been that active so I wasn't aware of it. Withdraw it, if you'd like.

Declined per reasons above. 06:44, June 19, 2019 (UTC)

Redstar (k) ~ For Approval
yeah this wasn't impossible or anything..