Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 60

Onion (Ro)- Approved
Second charart! this is like a fail though... Mossy   I fight to live I live to fight!

Looks good! I think you should make the silver parts darker, though. They look very pale gray- almost white. And maybe make the ear pink bigger. It's a little small. ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:27, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED :3 did what you said Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!

Good! Sharpen the black patches. (If you use pixlr, I'm not sure if they have an option to do that but they should) ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED okey dokey x3 Mossy   I fight to live I live to fight!

Lighten the ear pink and lighten the shading on the paws, otherwise, very nice! S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED done :) anything else? Mossy   I fight to live I live to fight!

Make the ear pink more trianglular. 19:20, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed :) anything else? Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  13:56, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you could afford to sharpen the patches some more. They're a little too blurred. ♫ mosspool ♫  the new dovesong! 20:16, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is he supposed to be black and white? The white needs to be lightened. Darkhallows... Mew? 21:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Onion is silver and black, not white, so I think that the color is fine, but the ear pink needs to be more of a reddish color rather than pink. 03:36, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED i re-did the whole image because the sharpen tool hates me for some reason xD but i think it looks better now but thats for you guys to decide. Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  18:59, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest making the earpink more reddish then pinkish. 20:14, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED x3 did that :) anything else? Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  22:08, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should blur the transitions more. 04:20, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed :) anything else? :3 Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  16:48, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

De-saturate the earpink. It looks too bright now. 22:03, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED done anything else? :3 Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  22:10, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:31, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed x3 Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  01:16, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Good! She looks fine now :D 01:23, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thank yew x3 Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  03:56, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stomach shading and blur the gray transistion. 00:51, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED fixed anything else? :) Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!  14:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Well done for only your second. Comments before approval? -- 03:00, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. 18:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Frecklewish (A) - Approved
Here you go. A terrible Frecklepaw. Yay. :3 Construcments? ♥Ice storm★  01:15, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are rather hard to see. Darken them a bit. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 01:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are too light, darken the shading. S U N S P I R I T ☼ Best Furry Friends Forever! 06:10, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and highlights. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 11:46, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, i thought I had Frecklewish up for approval. I reserved it before you and had it up for approval before you...... River   storm 14:50, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

No Riverstorm you have her as a Medicine cat apprentice this is her as a regular apprentice.As for the image define the stripes more other than that its wonderful :) Mossy  I fight to live I live to fight!

OMG I'm so sorry Icestorm! *hits self on head* I must be going blind!! Anyways, as an apology gift, I'll tell you what to do...I agree with Mossy, i'd say just define the stripes. River  storm 15:40, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back leg farthest from up :) 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The mottle spots sort of look whitish. I think you could afford to make them darker. ♫ mosspool ♫  the new dovesong! 21:35, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the spots and stripes. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  11:45, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Lol, Riverstorm, it's okay. :) Anyways, I re-did the stripes and mottles and removed the highlights and added new ones. It was IMPOSSIBLE to do. :P 00:50, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tiny bit. 17:42, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add a white spot on the eye. 17:45, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the ear pink fine and it's a perfect hue right now, and the eye already has a white spot. This looks beautiful; nice job, Ice. Comments before approval? -- 03:02, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I added it, but I forgot to say reuploaded. *facepalm* And thanks, Bramble. It means a lot to me. 19:16, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

No problem, Ice. Approved. 18:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Snooky (KP) - Approved
I counted and this should be under the limit. I hope I named the image right, because I wasn't sure if his current name is Snooky or Snookthorn (I love the name Snookthorn). I'm pretty proud of this image, but I'm not sure if the black patches are dark enough in some places. Comments and suggestions? 14:31, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

You're right about the black patches. Darken them a bit where the highlights are. 14:40, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened them, but I don't think that the changes are showing yet. Let me know if they don't show, and I'll try uploading again. 14:54, August 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. I don't know why, but I had to upload again for the changes to show. 22:17, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the patches. 23:32, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * This is nice, but I think the eyes are neonish. It looks like he sees through the dark, wait cats DO see through the dark. OOps
 * I'll get to blurring the patches soon, but the eyes are the exact same color as they are on another of my kittypet images, Jacques. (For the unsigned thing, I'm pretty sure that's who it was, but if not please let me know.) 14:09, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. He looks pale gray-and-black. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  15:19, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? Not sure if I lightened the shading enough or not. Also, this is sort of random, but as of today I've been a member of the wiki for a year (that's why my sig is like my old ones, just a little revamped). 17:19, August 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * I think you should darken the ear pink. 00:26, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations on one year, Icethroat. =) That makes me feel a little less old. =p Anyhow, I believe the ear pink color is fine as it is - you know, perhaps we should have an official chart that has an ear pink for a certain basic color so we don't keep debating on the ear pink color and it would be easier to add. Maybe I should make a discussion on that.. anyhow, comments before approval? -- 03:27, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. 18:22, August 17, 2010 (UTC)