Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Sol (Ki) ~Tweaked
Tweaked for tufted tail tip. Latest OA was Paleh. Changes not showing. 21:17, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Could you try to curve the part where the tuft and the tail meet! It looks a bit crooked 17:50, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing. 22:23, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! The white tail tip looks a bit gray. 23:49, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 00:25, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I can't actually tell if the tail tip is white or not. It seems brown.

I already fixed that; the changes aren't showing,though. 00:29, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I think the changes might be showing now, but it still seems a little gray-brownish? If not, my apologies.

I think it's fine, but I'll wait to see what others think. 18:06, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Skye, it does look a bit gray-brownish. 21:02, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 01:09, August 27, 2013 (UTC)

Lineart gap on the tufted tail. 21:09 Tue Aug 27

Where? I don't see it. 21:56, August 27, 2013 (UTC)

It's just right of the big tuft on the tail. Could you shorten the tail a bit? It's current length just looks a bit unrealistically long. Nice job! 01:49, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, but I'll wait to see what others think. 18:55, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

It does seem a bit long, honestly.

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 19:20, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Can you somehow move the tail <-- probably about two - four pixels? It appears to be bunched up near the pelt. If you think it's fine, that's cool with me.

I think it's fine. 00:26, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

I think that it should be moved, it does look really close to his side. Also, define the shading on his tail. 20:35, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I am not changing the placement or length of the tail AGAIN! Changes not showing. 22:19, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

There's no need to get snippy like that. .-. If someone asks you to change something, clearly, they think it could be changed. You can politely decline, but there is no need for what you said. That being said, the tail shading is still a little flat.

I didn't mean to get snappy; I was just trying to emphasize that I was having trouble. I'm more angry at myself than anyone else, and I'm sorry that it came out like that. I'll get to the shading soon. 22:56, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing, and, again, I'm sorry for getting rather agitated. 23:01, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe make the tail a few pixels farther than the body? This is awesome, Blue. 00:39, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 02:14, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Totally not mandatory, but is the back paw supposed to be white? I can't tell at all, so if you're not busy, could you possibly add a highlight or something to the back foot?

Yeah, I'm a bit too busy. 15:59, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Brook (Lo) Redone
okay 06:26, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad. 20:53, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Define and expand shading tons. gj 21:07 Tue Aug 27

Re-uploaded. I think the shading is fine 08:52, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Can you just define it on her stomach and haunch and face? 21:06, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe define the overall shading, I can't really see any of it except for on the legs. 01:07, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Thornclaw (A) ~ Redone
Redone because of shading and stripes and everything. Last OA was me. Comments? 04:56, 28, 08, 2013

He be a sexy apprentice too! Darken the shading a bit more and define it on the head 04:59, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Scarly. 8DD 05:11, 28, 08, 2013

Define the shading on the upper part of the tail, perhaps?

Tigerstar (A) - Redone
Redone to match Hawkfrost and the like. I didn't add all the scars being how he was just an apprentice at this time. All colors from the warrior. OAs consist of Oblivion, Stoner, and Flamingomom3. Changes probably not showing. 20:20 Sat Aug 31

I know you got the stripes from the warrior, but could you slightly darken the stripes a tad, and thicken them too, especially the back stripe? Also, did you fill in the nose? This looks cute! 20:37, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! c: 20:49 Sun Sep 1

Troutstar (L) ~ Tweaked
OA be Iceheart, and this is in fact tweaked. Anyone who dare challenge it is more than welcome to see the .psd file. Gave the shading a bit more of a light source, and while I was tweaking it, the ear pink became a little iffy, so I had to fix that too. Changes are here.

Shading looks a bit blotchy- could you smooth it out a little more? 06:01, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not much else I can do about that unless you want me basically getting rid of the previous image by blurring it into non-existence.

Ripplestar (L) - Redone
OA be moi. Waaayyyy tooo lazy to list reasons for redoing, but I think i made him a little too orange.... I'll fix later. Comments? 05:20, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe add stripes to the ginger, and make the eyes more yellow - on my monitor they look orange 14:44, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:20, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt L) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to make fur more black, I just ran a burn tool over his fur. OA be Paleh. Comments? 16:17, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the highlights just a tad more, they seem a tad solid. This is great! Those eyes. *.* 16:21, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Reups  like some lyrics in a song I heard, "Wise eyes... you see the core in me..." 16:29, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

I can't tell, but is his nose completely black? It needs to be, as far as I know.

It is black. 00:25, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

No, I mean like #000000 black, as in same color as the lineart. I was always told it needed to be pure black... since black cats have black noses. Or at least that's what I was taught a long while back.

Reups ah 00:47, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the highlights? I thought they were fine before. 06:00, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

I think they're fine. 11:16, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with legs - they were fine before. 14:35, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reups 15:00, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (K) - Tweaked
Just tweaking the gray shading that I had put on him. 16:49, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Tigerstar (K) - Redone
Redone like the others. OAs are Scarlet and Shelly. Colors from warrior. Changes not showing. 16:35 Mon Sep 2

Go here for the changes:  16:45 Mon Sep 2

Darken the stripes, and thicken the back stripe a bit, I can't see it well 16:46, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Tigerstar (D) ~ Redone
His reservation was removed so I snagged him. I'm not very proud of this... see here for changes. 21:47, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little bit? And what are you talking about, Sorrel? This is wonderful! You've improved so much as of late and I'm very impressed. .o.

Reups have I? -churrs- changes are here if they're not showing. 22:09, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Thicken the pale belly, and blur it some more, too. 22:14, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Do you want the xcf to Tigerstar's warrior? Also, make the scars more smoother and make it that the ear pink doesn't cover the entire ear. 22:47, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

This is a good matching job, but wouldn't it be easier to copy the base of the warrior into the deputy blank and then just match the tail? I've done it before. It beats matching a style. Your choice though c: 22:49 Mon Sep 2

Am I allowed to do that? I thought it was image theft. Well, I'll see how I get on.

If the artist of the warrior image gives you permission, in this case Icy, then you may. Other than that, no.

Reups Changes aren't showing yet. I'll try do it on my own, but if things get difficult I'll ask Icy. c: 23:39, September 2, 2013 (UTC)