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Cloudmist (Lo) ~ For Evaluation
First charart! Hopefully this goes well. The turtorials were really useful. Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job for your first one! Smudge the shading and lighten it a bit though. 04:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded (thank you! :) ) - Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:06, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if you're aware, but her base on the apprentice image is pure white. I can't tell because the brightness on my desktop is lowered right now.

There are some sharp white pixels on the <--- front leg (where it meets the rest of the body) and on the other front leg towards the shoulder. Probably just missing some shading there. :P 19:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded My screen was at max brightness, but lowered it now and managed to find the white spots. It still looks sorta white to me, but I tried to pale the shading to hopefully make it look less gray if it did. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the image, for instance the belly? — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  14:38, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light a bit on the legs and tail. 00:51, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure about the depth Shadowbright67 (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe just add a touch more depth to the shading, and define the light on the paws again

Maybe darken the ear pink? Shypaw11 (talk) 21:54, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart on the belly, near the <--- leg. 02:16, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Couldn't really catch the shading off-lineart so I'm not sure if its still there after using the eraser by the leg and belly. Shadowbright67 (talk) 03:57, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Wavepaw (A) - For Approval
she's waving buh-bye to 2016 too 03:11, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Thank god this terrible year is over. Define the light on the back paws. 02:19, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:38, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear. 03:34, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a little bit? 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:25, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) - For Approval
~Patch   feather~   15:18, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just me, but I don't think the tint of the brown matches the other images. It seems a bit too...dark. 01:20, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think there should just be a little more marks with a slight lighter shade so it's a bit like a gradient effect? (what am I even

Re-uploaded I can't tell if it looks any lighter. I used a much lighter brown though. ~Patch   feather~   16:48, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Would you like the file? The pattern doesn't seem to match correctly, as Sunjaw did it a certain way. 14:59, 1/03/2017

Perhaps add more speckles on the underside of the tail, as the other images seem to have a few more there

Re-uploaded Yeah, I think the file might help. ~Patch   feather~   14:22, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

I'm struggling to see the earpink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:26, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Cricketkit (Star) ~ For Approval
Completely forgotten how to charart >_>

eyes should be orange. 14:26, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups how did I miss that

Remove the white, as she's only stated to have a white hind leg. 18:04, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Smoothened the chest shading a bit. I thought tabbies are allowed to have white paws/chest/muzzle? Especially when she has some white genes (imnotmakinganysense) but if someone else agrees I'll gladly change it.

I'd agree to removing it as well, as from what I've heard, tabbies can have pale parts added, but adding white is a bit of an assumption for her description

Re-ups Does this work^^

They were never allowed to have extra white, dear. It's always been pale. Now, while it looks white on some images, it's almost always been pale... unless someone lies just to get their images how they want them. The pale as you have it is completely acceptable and I actually really like it.

is the nose filled in? or am I just being a blind ass again 21:02, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

It's pink lmao

Duckkit (Star) - For Approval
First original design. ^^ And yes, I did surgically place the short-haired tail onto this one. He's only described with a "straight tail", not a tail like his father, who's described with a "tail like a reed". Comments? 02:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little bit! It looks super cool. :DDD

He looks really greenish-yellow. Can you make him brown?

Reups I was thinking the exact same thing right after I posted it, Jayce. XD Found a different shade that I liked. 02:46, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you shift it just a little bit more? Now he looks slightly orange... but that could also be my screen.

Reups. Yeah, you're right. 02:52, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It's possibly my screen problem or my eyes? But to me it looks like... it has a ginger pelt with greenish stripes?

Reups I could see that for the stripes, but not so much on the pelt color. Probably because I've already changed it three times already in one day. Can I have a second opinion on the pelt color please? 05:09, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I have to agree, it looks more brownish gold than anyting. 05:35, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups You know what they say: fourth--er, fifth time's a charm, right? 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) - For Evaluation
I am a lot happier with this one! I like her eyes. 02:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reup 02:57, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading again please. 03:03, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:12, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the body (sorry that I'm not giving you a break). 03:37, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the <-- side 03:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be darkened - but it's probably the tint. Is the layer on Multiply? Try that if it's not, or change the brightness setting/saturation/contrast setting =)

Reuploaded 04:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste from the above <-- hip all the way to the underside of the tail. 04:42, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:36, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the eye-depth

​Reuploaded 21:50, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of shading to the collar? 00:14, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the bottom of the tail, and possibly darken the shading? 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:24, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading more. 15:12, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:59, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

darken the shading. not define, but darken. somewhere there should be a menu for "Hue" or "Brightness," for example, in firealpaca it's under filter. i believe that's what you use? anyway, darken it. 00:45, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:10, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Darktail (Loner) - For Approval


hahaha i'm not living up to the other artists' great art sorry guys

also ill fix the waste above the back later 03:39, January 6, 2017

Smoothen out the shading 03:40, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It might be me, but I can't really see the earpink. Besides that, nice work! :) Shadowbright67 (talk) 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Blend the shading more, please.  12:14 Fri Jan 6 

reuploaded i just realized how awful that shading was 22:59, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the hind leg closest to us. :DD 21:00, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded stuff things insert creative message here 00:41, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Fallowfern(E) ~ For Approval


Maybe add just a teensy bit of shading on the two front paws? I know the light's coming from the front so they shouldn't have much on them, but not having any shading makes them look flat. Same goes for the ears. 00:11, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
16:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be two unfilled white pixels on --> side of the tail

Darktail (K) ~ For Approval
You now get to experience my homemade shading. After 30 minutes with problems of Gimp. 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Remove the ragged pelt. 02:33, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 02:35, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, but maybe darken the white slightly? I'm not too sure if you should do this tbh. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  15:02, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

why darken white? it's supposed to be.....well, white. 15:11, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

it just looks blindingly white, but it could just be my computer — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  23:33, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

It's fine. White needs to be white, not pale gray.

Roach (Ro) - For Approval
Why was shading this so frustrating? 00:14, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

It looks as though there's an unfilled pixel on the <--- ear. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:21, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Messed with the shaidng, but as far as I can see, there aren't any unfilled pixels in the ears. 00:24, January 8, 2017 (UTC)