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Jag (CG) ~ For Approval
Gosh, the mud was a challenge! I'm still not sure if i even did that well on it, but I tried. Ah well, I like challenges! I'm just gonna get this up before I ruin it more by fiddling. ^^; SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a bit. 03:33, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Can you fix the pupils a bit? They might just look weird on my screen but they look a bit off with them being pointed to the ground. This is super cute btw and you did great on the mud! 03:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eyes. And tysm, Echo. ^^ SquidwardPlays 03:54, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Is there a red or pink tint on the shading or something? It kind of sticks out, and I'm not sure if it goes well with the rest of Jag. Also, light source? Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There is the tint as Shadow said.. can you make the mud on the tail brighter? I can barely see it. Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:47, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Messed around with the mud on the tail a bit, is it any better? I also completely redid the shading. SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I can't see shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:01, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? SquidwardPlays 11:07, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Yes! This looks wonderful. The only thing I really see is the haunch shading looks kind of clumped in one spot, can you expand it to the belly and the bottom of the haunch more?  H A W K  F I R E  15:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I THINK I fixed the haunch shading. SquidwardPlays 11:19, November 4, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

add some more shading depth and darkness? it seems a lil flat. 00:27, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Night (CG) - For Evaluation
This is probably an unpopular opinion but I enjoyed doing the mud. Also, yes, I'll fix the shading. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:19, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and smudge the mud a little bit. It looks kind of clump in some areas, like the front leg and the flank.  H A W K  F I R E  13:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups nvm I don't like mud now Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:02, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. And the mud needs to be smudged a tad more. And is it me, or does her eyes make her look like an ailen from space? You don't have to change the eyes by the way.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:06, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups that's meant to be eyelids, because eyes and earpink are my weak spots. Also the shading is now officially as dark as it can get. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 01:05, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink is now super dark on the right side and bright on the left side. Can you make them the same color?  H A W K  F I R E  03:42, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I think that's because the shading is covering the ear pink, Hawkey ^^ Regardless, could you add some more shading to the haunch and tail? I can see where you defined the shading on the face, chest, legs and stomach, but I can't see any shading on the haunch or tail. 15:37, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

My bad! Disregard my previous comment. ^^  H A W K  F I R E  19:00, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the lighter areas? I'm not seeing any here at all. ​​​​

Could you define the mud or maybe sharpen it? I'm having trouble seeing it. 02:42, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups oof Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:58, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 21:51, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 22:09, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the paws, tail and chest.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:18, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Alright, this may just be me, but I personally feel like the mud is now a little too intense, if that makes sense. I feel like it might've been sharpened up too much, and maybe could do with having less of the mud in general, but that's just what I think. If you think the mud's fine, you don't have to do a thing, since the thing about how bright/intense it is, could also just totally be my screen unless someone else sees it that way too. I just was thinking it so I thought I'd point it out. SquidwardPlays 02:37, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

^ I agree. I think it's a bit excessive on the head as well. The body mud is fine, but it's really bright and contrasts pretty bad on both my screens. Maybe making it a darker and less saturated will help. 23:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the earpink.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:18, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

I'll get on the mud, but can I have a second opinion on the shading? It looks quite defined on my screen. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 02:05, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups, got the mud to look more like her other images Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 02:29, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

can you blend the <-- earpink? it looks hard 19:39, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Talon (CG) - CBA
Wow, love the new blanks! There's some things I need to correct (like the overly dark stomach/haunch shading) but I just wanted to get it up for now.  H A W K  F I R E  23:21, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the lightsource as well? Malina457 (talk) 00:23, November 4, 2018 (UTC)malina

Could you taper the stripe some? 00:41, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I do agree with Malina and Vec, can you lower the opacity of the shading when you fix the light source?Heyoitpotater (talk) 01:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also I added more mud :3  H A W K  F I R E  03:26, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 00:17, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but could you define the lighter areas on the image? I'm mainly only seeing shading throughout the main part of the body and it sort of throws off the pattern. Since I'm also having issues seeing the stripes, I think perhaps tweaking the areas without shading and expanding them might solve this. ​​​​​

I can darken the stripes to make them more visible, but the dark shading on the <-- side of the body was intentional. I wanted to try a new shading style where it seems like most of the cat's body is hidden in shadows. His other images are very dark as well.  H A W K  F I R E  00:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I realize that, but I can see the pattern on those images. I can't with this one and the shadows obscure it a lot more than they would on other images. ​​​​

I personally think its fine. I can see everything well on my screen. 01:05, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the pattern perfectly fine. Make sure all colors are the same though. 01:10, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but others (including myself) have gotten the exact same kinds of comments and have been made to change things, so I believe it should also apply here. It's not right to allow one thing to pass, while forcing almost everyone else to change their image. The shading does obscure the pattern here and I can't see it at all. ​​​​

'''Reuploaded. '''Hopefully you think this looks better.  H A W K  F I R E  01:31, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I asked you to define the light- did you? I'm not seeing that in the file history. ​​​

I did, but I didn't change a lot because I really like how it is right now. I can see the pattern just fine on both my computer and my phone.  H A W K  F I R E  22:07, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Where did you define it, then? Because I am not seeing any changes to the light in the file history, and it's not fair to anyone else in the past who has gotten made to change their images for this exact same reason. I'm also seeing a lot of miscolored pixels where said shading is. ​​

The miscolored pixels are my version of the mud, like it's mud splatters. David and several others have the same kind of splattered mud style.  H A W K  F I R E  22:22, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

If anyone else genuinely has a problem with my shading, which is supposed to be artist's choice and matches the other images very well, please comment.  H A W K  F I R E  22:24, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

It looks too dark imo, and I cant quite see the light? Malina457 (talk) 16:58, November 8, 2018 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded. Brightened entire image, made mud more apparent and less pixel-y.  H A W K  F I R E  17:34, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 20:40, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - For Approval
all colors are the same, this one just lacks the excessive amount of shading his other images have, so it looks lighter. ​​

Maybe define the face shading? I love this Malina457 (talk) 02:41, November 5, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Do you have a specific spot you'd like for me to define the shading? ​

Adding to Malina's critique by asking you to define shading everywhere because I cannot see it.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:03, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Alright, maybe this'll work? Definitely not used to these blanks yet, but I really do like them... ​​​​​​​

might be nitpicky but I think there wouldn't be light on the chest with this source. or at least the there'd be shading where the chest fur lineart is if u get what I mean 21:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I still can't see shading except on the ears and tail, can you possibly add more mud.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:13, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I honestly think the amount of mud is good. I can see the shading fine too. Maybe it's your screen??

00:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Are the feet in shading? Other than that I love this Malina457 (talk) 17:03, November 8, 2018 (UTC)malina

Re-uploaded. I defined the feet shading and the area where David suggested. Sorry it took so long, work is hell. ​

Spirekit (k) ~ CBA
that's nice.

00:03, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

can you darken the black a bit? It looks more of a gray to me? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 00:44, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 01:22, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. actually way happier with this. Redid the pattern so it looks like my crazy cat. I need to stop being a troll.

04:23, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 00:17, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (Star) - CBA
The shading is hideous cause I need to fix something with my tablet, but I finally get to use this. 01:04 Tue Nov 6

This looks gorgeous! Could you soften the speckles only a tad? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:05, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:08 Tue Nov 6

Nice. I think you already plan on fixing the shading, but smooth out and lighten the shading?

I agree with Fox. The shading does need to be lighter since she's a light-colored cat, especially on her face.  H A W K  F I R E  18:17, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded My tablet was hardcore acting up >> 21:51 Tue Nov 6

can you soften the speckles on her back a little? 00:26, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:53 Wed Nov 7

The shading on the tail needs to be defined a bit, as well as the light source for the tail. If the light source is above her, there should be some bottom shading on the tail. 22:56, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Just for clarificaiton, the light source is coming in <--- direction (from the right going to the left) and is a source that has been used multiple times. ^^ 23:05, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Almost all of my StarClan images have used this light source. Unless there's an overwhelming number of people who have a problem with it, I'm not changing it. If that was the case, all of them would need to be tweaked/redone. 15:34 Thu Nov 8

I just think that maybe the head or body shading needs defining? Might be nitpicky though, sorry  ^ ^" Malina457 (talk) 17:00, November 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I disagree with further definition of the shading, because anymore defining and the shading will look too dark, especially because this is a white cat.

CBA? 14:10, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Flaxkit (K) ~ For Approval


This is my first one! :D Queen 02:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC) Que enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

define shading, this also need renamed to File:Flaxkit.kit.png <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:27, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

To add on a little bit, I can see no shading at all myself, so try to define it as much as you can while it keeping it looking good. This part is just an idea to try if you think it might work, but maybe try darkening. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:36, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

The shading should be darker now, if not, I'll have to see what I can do so that everyone can still see the design. The file name has been renamed. Anything else? Queen 02:42, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

The shading still needs defining and the file needs to be renamed Malina457 (talk) 03:43, November 6, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Although eye color is artist's choice, his eyes are looking gray-white.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:16, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Friendly reminder not to align your images ^^ 17:47, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I made his pelt color a bit lighter, so the shading should be more defined that way. His eyes are amber instead of blue and the file name should be renamed. Anything else? Queen 22:17, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

The shading still needs some defining and the eyes need to have black pupils Malina457 (talk) 23:28, November 6, 2018 (UTC)malina

Hopefully this is better ;-; Queen 23:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC) <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Define the shading on the neck and head. And when you upload, make sure you re-upload over File:Flaxkit.kit.png and not as a new image. When you're ready to upload, just go to his file that I linked and hit Upload a new version of this file and follow the prompts. That way there's only one image. It will also automatically show the current version everywhere. 00:16, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

What is the color of his eyes? They are still gray-white on my screen.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:21, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the earpink? it seems to blend in with the pelt a bit too much. Great job on your first charart!

21:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Are changes showing? His eyes are still gray-white. And I really don't think it's my tablet.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:52, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Have patience, Potato. They haven't reuploaded yet and it hasn't even been a full 24 hours since you last commented. 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

This has been told to you before, Potato. The kit blank only has 3 pixels for color. The eyes are fine. You can clearly tell what color they are. The blank is just small and a pain to work with in general. <span style="">15:36 Thu Nov 8

Okay, I think I was able to overwrite the photo on his file. And I can confirm that his eyes are NOT gray and white! I do hope this is version is better! Queen 21:56, November 8, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Those eyes are on point! :D I'm still not seeing any shading on the head. Also, define the light (meaning remove some of the shading) on the hind paw so it's not all covered in shading. I'm also gonna bump ya up to an apprentice, since this is more than 50% complete and this honestly looks amazing. 23:15, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for liking this! (I did practice a bit before entering in). Hopefully the shading on the head is fine now. I also played around to make the shading look like the "furred" texture, though it shouldn't mess with anything. Queen 00:09, November 9, 2018 (UTC) <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Shellpaw (App Alt) ~ CBA
ok this looks weird. i'll try and fix the pale stuff later

Um.. this is an alt. Shellpaw is white, so I'm changing the heading to include "Alt". If you haven't renamed the file, do that now.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:04, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Heading Renamed.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:06, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading? Malina457 (talk) 04:10, November 6, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define earpink. It matches the shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:13, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

can you define it a bit more around the tail/butt area? also there's a patch of black that looks lighter than the others around there, or at least a darker bit cuts abruptly into it. 00:29, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Could you highlight where?

Re-uploaded

sorry for being so late but I think it was just m laptop screen. 07:10, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Oh no it wasn't just your laptop. I found a spot of unsmudged shading so I got rid of it. Forgot to say that during the reupload.

Comments before approval? 20:41, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Quailpaw (A) ~ CBA
Comments? 03:14, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

could you lighten the shading, it looks a bit too dark <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:23, November 6, 2018 (UTC) Reuploaded. 03:26, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten it a little more.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:08, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any lighter, and I fear it will be hard to see. 04:16, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Don't worry, there's no need. Well, maybe lighten it on the chest?

Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:21, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Could you brighten the image up? this looks pale gray, when it should be white. ​​​

Reuploaded. Changed the shading tint a bit. 22:51, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the shoulder just a bit? 00:10, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:19, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading on his flank area and define the light on the legs? 00:23, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:29, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the base of the tail a bit? 16:05, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:50, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 20:28, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Moss that Grows by River (CG) - CBA
v sure this is a redo so here she is, I'll fix the shading later. Something about it looks off to me. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 09:57, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, much happier now. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 10:07, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

CG blank redos do not count towards the one image limit. This is perfectly fine. Anyways, smooth out the shading, please. ^^ ​​

Define the shading a bit as well.

16:22, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Not sure how to word this, but do you mind if I have this back? Moss was my image before the redos, as I was the most recent artist to tweak it over a year ago. I wasn't sure how to approach it when TRS came out and didn't know about the redo rule (whoops ¯\_(ツ)_/¯) and only just now got back to the wiki and saw this in place. I withdrew it with the intention of coming back to it because I tweaked Moss forever ago...unless I'm misinformed about tweaking = ownership. 17:45, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I'd count that as an original, yeah go ahead. I don't mind I'll do one of the others then. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:33, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Taking over. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! 00:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful once again, Vec! But the shading on her toes is a bit overblurred, would you mind smoothing it a bit? Very nitpicky, feel free to ask for a second opinion. You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   <span style="color:gold;font-family:Nothing You Could Do;font-size:18pt;text-shadow:darkslategray 2.5px 1.5px 1px;">patience.

Smoothing entails blurring it more. Did you mean sharpening it? And which toes? All of them? 02:15, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Or did you mean there is too much shading and there needs to be more light visible on them? 02:16, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the far front toes, yeah Malina457 (talk) 04:12, November 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups 05:35, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? ​

Bird That Rides the Wind (CG) ~ CBA
Reposting bc it doesn't count towards the limit.

can you define and perhaps expand the shading slightly everywhere? 00:22, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Can you add a stripe near the base of the tail?Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:06, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded for the stripe thing I'm going to hold that off unless someone else agrees because on her other images (loner specifically) there doesn't seem to be stripes there

CBA? 23:26, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Gullpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Assuming I'm allowed to have this up right now, here it is. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:41, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a lot please. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:43, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded hopefully I haven't under or over-defined the shading.<font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:41, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Would the shading on the back be there with the source your going with? <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:47, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did my best to get rid of the shading from the back. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 11:54, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Add some more shading on the lower chest, stomach, and --> side of the shoulder 00:10, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 12:20, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

define the shading on the tail, and there's also waste leaking from it. 00:21, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Feel like maybe I added too much shading onto the tail now, but not sure. i'll just reup it anyway. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 12:27, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define shading on both ears.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:25, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the ears seems pretty fine to me. If somebody else agrees that I should definite it, then I will though <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 08:19, November 7, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I think it could be defined just a little in the ---> ear. Also, the shading is leaking on the chest where it meets the shoulder. 23:09, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

With the current light source, the light needs to be defined on the tail, slightly on the chest, the < side of the < ear, and the back legs. 00:25, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Sunnypaw (A) ~ CBA
I already know I messed up on naming this file fhkdjfgh. But regardless here she is. Matching colours was hard again but hopefully it looks okay! 05:25, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading and top stripe on the chest needs to cross the chest. 16:03, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:37, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Um.. there's a brown thing under <-- that eye. Is that meant to be there? It looks like she has s swollen eye.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:00, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shading was a bit dark under the eye, i tried lightening it so it looks a bit better! 23:07, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 20:42, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Spider (Lo) - CBA
Spidey saves the day! Alt caption: how does one shade a black cat  H A W K  F I R E  19:31, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit on the shoulder, haunch, and back leg furthest from us? It's looking a bit blotchy. (And the answer is just give it your best shot lol) 22:58, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

You also need to define shading on the ear too.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:02, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Also I desaturated the ear pink cause it was super neon  H A W K  F I R E  23:57, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 20:43, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Flowerstem (AVoS) (W) ~ CBA
20:35, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

this needs to be shorthaired. 20:57, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded whoops 21:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the limbs furthest from us.  H A W K  F I R E  23:42, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:43, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 20:43, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Hollowkit (Kit) ~ CBA
Really wanted to do a tabby, I feel like I might need to lighten this, and the eyes are orange, they're ust desaturated looking on here Malina457 (talk) 22:28, November 7, 2018 (UTC)malina

Smooth out the shading on the chest and tail just a bit? 23:00, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 03:17, November 8, 2018 (UTC)malina

Comments before approval? 20:43, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Pigeonpaw (SC) (App) ~ For Approval
Hey look whos back and regressed too much. 🤮 22:47, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? Malina457 (talk) 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Define and smooth shading, like Malina said. 22:54, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

There are some unfilled pixels on<-- that ear tip, can you fix that?Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:05, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's just the highlights on the pink ^^ 23:16, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Add a bit of shading in <-- ear? On the front leg farthest from us there's a splotch of shading that looks a bit bold compared to the rest in the area, can you possibly blend it a little? Define the shading depth a bit on the shoulder. Lovely work!

23:39, November 7, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading and thanks Patch for the help! :D 00:13, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on <-- that hind pawHeyoitpotater (talk) 01:36, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the texture, especially on the shoulder Malina457 (talk) 03:53, November 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded 11:11, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading just a little more? I can see it, but I'm straining my eyes to see it. Except for the tail. The tail's good imo 23:17, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:24, November 8, 2018 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out on the > back leg some, there's just one darker patch that needs it - and also there's some waste floating out by the > ear 00:21, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:34, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Could you lighten the texture a tad, it seems really rough and its softer on the kit image, the shading on the lower back could be smoothenes quite a bit as well. It looks kinda blotchy to me. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 09:32, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

The texture on the shoulder still looks very criss crossy, it doesn't match with the rest of the texture. 20:34, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Violetshine (Q) - For Approval
all colors are from her other images, which I am the OA of and still have all of the .psd files. ​

Juniperclaw (D) - For Approval
I don't know guys...just the idea of Tigerheart/star contemplating about his new deputy and being like "yeah, Juniperclaw is as good as I'm gonna get" is really, really funny imo. 15:45, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

I know I was shocked that he was his choice lol. Lighten the ear pink a bit so that it's more visible.  H A W K  F I R E  18:17, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I removed some of the shading there. Hope this helps? 18:33, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

I love Juniperclaw Can you define the shading a bit more ? I can't see it too well on my screen. 20:35, November 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 20:45, November 9, 2018 (UTC)