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Feathertail (Alt W) - CBA
I actually enjoyed this one. 02:17 Fri Dec 7

Can you define leg shading please. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:23, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

The yellow highlight on her shoulder is really kind of off-putting. Could you reduce it some? 02:28, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

That's actually a marking from the original image. It was color picked, but I'll see what I can do. 02:32 Fri Dec 7

This is utterly stunning. While I like the yellow highlight, you should desaturate it a bit, as Hawkey said it's really off putting. —

I think it's fine? Considering Sun said it was color picked from the image. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:35, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Nah going to agree with Hawk and Echo. That does look off to me. There are some unfilled pixels on the haunch. Also Sunjaw Fox said you can have Pebbleshine back, she doesn't have time to work on her anymore.Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:37, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Off-putting or not, they are shown on the image Sun is matching, so to remove them wouldn't make any sense. ​​

I never said to remove them. Only to reduce/desaturate them. 03:43, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I don't want it gone, I think it should be a bit more brown than yellow. Also Potato, Pebbleshine will be figured out, she'll get her image eventually and people will do it when they get around to it. ^^ —

The color from the image isn't brown, it's a golden color. That's what Sun was going for. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:53, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's fine, other than that maybe define the head shading? I love this Malina457 (talk) 13:19, December 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The front paws need shading to be defined as well. —

The brown does look out of place, and I agree with Mink about reducing or desaturating them. 19:32, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded My tablet driver got screwed up, so this is all I am able to do right now. I am not going to mess with the golden-brown further. I took all of the colors directly from the image this is based on, so it matches. 20:28 Sun Dec 9

CBA? This is beautiful. 15:47, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Woollytail (T) - For Approval
21:56, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more. This looks great, Icy! 21:57, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink is fine imho. Define the shading everywhere.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:35, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the texture? It’s super dark in his other images. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 22:38, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

I think the shading looks good, Potato? It's certainly dark enough on the main body. Any darker, it would be too dark imo. But I do believe it could be defined a bit on the hind leg furthest from us and add some more shading to the neck. 00:46, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Also, I believe the white on the paws extends up the back portion of the leg a bit in the warrior. 00:50, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Actually, I agree with Hawkey about the ear pink; this seems to be an issue the entire set has... I can't see the ear pink at all. ​​

If it were a bit lighter it would be visible, but since it's so dark and close to grey it's difficult to see. —

Re-uploaded: 18:29, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

The white still needs to extend up a bit onto the leg like how it's shown on the warrior. 00:08, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Can I ask what you mean? I think they extend the same now... 00:16, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

What Vec means is on the warrior pixel there's a very thin strip of white running up --> that hind leg. Not sure if you can see it because it has shading on it, but it's there.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:27, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth?

Re-uploaded: 19:55, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe these will help with what I'm trying say; sorry I'm so bad at it. ;u; The warrior has white here, circled in red, so the tunneler should look something like this. 20:44, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

The streaks on the fur seem a little off. On most of the body, the fur is going up and down, but on the sides of the main body it's going side to side. I dunno, just seems a little odd to me. Like, if you take a red colored pencil and start going up and down on a spere, and then start going side to side, it looks off. COOLcat9352 (talk) 23:12, December 9, 2018 (UTC)COOLcat9352

Re-uploaded 23:36, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Coolcat, textures are supposed to flow with the cat, rather than be in one direction. The texture here is fine. ^^ —

Mistmouse (T) - CBA
I chose her cause I love her name :D 23:03, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:08, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Could you be more specific as to where the shading needs to be defined? It looks pretty defined to me. 23:13, December 7, 2018 (UTC)

Pretty much everywhere.Heyoitpotater (talk) 00:06, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

imo I think it's defined enough, but I do feel like the shading could be expanded on the shoulder, neck and top portion of the tail. 00:44, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reups. Played around with the definition of the shading as well. 03:23, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Comparing this to the warrior (the first in this set for colors, stripe softness, ect), it appears that the warrior's stripes are a bit softer than how you have them... which kinda makes me want to go nominate that queen, since the stripes really don't match...and it's sort of giving off a bit of a misleading air when it comes to matching. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

Oh no. I matched my stripes to the queen because I was working with the same side, while the warrior displayed the opposite side. 03:32, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

I also want to point out that this situation also happened with Storm Pelt, and in that case you told me to match the charart that displays the side I'm working on. 03:36, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe soften the stripes a bit or lower their opacity? In terms of matching the position, they seem fine since Hawkey was matching the queen's side. —

The stripes match fine to me. Can you make the earpink a tad more visible? 19:26, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this a little better? I color picked the ear pink from the warrior, but the color itself kinda blends into the base color. 04:32, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:37, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Flailfoot (T) ~ For Approval
First charart. I'll fix the earpink to match the warrior and elder after I post this. --- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   04:45, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded The earpink is fixed. Sliver   pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   04:49, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This is really cute!! Can you define the shading a bit better and darken it? —

Reuploaded I darkened it? I hope you can see a difference ^-^ -- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   04:57, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Congrats on your first charart! You sure picked a tough one; black cats are notorious for being difficult to shade. But I believe you can do it. :) The shading is still hardly visible, and you're going to have to darken it more. 05:13, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! I can't tabby well so I chose Flailfoot :) How's the shading? -- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   05:19, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This is lovely for a first! I can barely see the earpink- Potato Flakin

Oh whoops, that was Potato up there. That's an old username, and I can't find the previous one. I'll try to fix that.-Potato Flakin

Reuploaded The earpink should be slightly more visible now. -- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   05:33, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found something wrong with the nose. -- Sliver    pelt    is god    with    shining stars    undefined   like echosong   05:45, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Black cats are my favorite to do ;; define the leg shading on <-- back leg Malina457 (talk) 14:39, December 8, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reuploaded This looks dark 15:14, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I forgot the nose again. 15:14, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't like how light the shading looks so I darkened it. 15:36, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This looks over 50% done, so I will be changing the title to "for approval" and bumping you up to an apprentice. 19:28, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Appledash! Also, I’m on mobile so it’s hard to edit. -- 19:33, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Could you perhaps define the light on the hind leg furthest from us (the <--- one) and the neck? I can't see anything there. 00:22, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gimp closed on me so I redid it. Silverfur  skz  [ 06:08, 12/10/2018 ] 06:08, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I keep forgetting the nose! -- Silverfur   skz  [ 09:38, 12/10/2018 ]

Lilywhisker (Alt T) ~ For Approval
Look how disgusting that paw is ugh. 05:11, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

This is gorgeous, I love the shading! Can you shapen the paw a bit more to look more broken, if that makes any sense? It looks like it's being held up in the air like the front paw instead of broken. —

Got my username back. If you need reference for the leg, look at File:Lilywhisker.df.png.Heyoitpotater (talk) 05:38, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Still not happy with it but hooray 05:43, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a little? 19:29, December 8, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 02:44, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Sandgorse (T)~ For Approval
I dont know if I like the fluff tuffs or not. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:12, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Friendly reminder not to thumb your images! Reduce the pale parts on the tail, belly, chest and muzzle. For the first three, the paler parts are very thin and don't creep onto the main body very much. On the muzzle, reduce the pale parts so it doesn't reach the eyes or cheeks. 20:38, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink looks really light compared to his other images. Color pick from either of his previous images to get the correct color. Also, in addition to what Vec said, there needs to be some more stripes. 20:47, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

This needs to be renamed File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png. You are missing a letter in the file name. Also, put some bare skin on where the tufts are, being described with patchy fur means missing fur, which shows skin. If you need reference look at File:Sandgorse.star.png.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, the "T" in tunneler doesn't need to be uppercase.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:59, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re~Up Okay, and I want to know, should I edit the positioning and or the shape of the fluff tuffs? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:11, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

You probably should try to match the StarClan one. Did you dethumb this? Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Also, this looks a little darker than his other images. Maybe ask Jayce for the base color if you get stuck.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:21, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Potato Flakin, I am trying to make it mach the warrior blank, because that is how it works, do the first one, not a later one, and it is dethumbed Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:42, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

In regards to the fur tufts, make them a little shorter and smaller, if that makes sense. More, you know, tufty ^^ Also, add a little pink (the ear pink color is fine) right underneath each tuft to mimic the exposed skin. 21:45, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re~Oops, fixed the fluff tuffs, I seem to like them now, and lowered the shading opacsity Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:00, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

I did both of Sandgorse's other images. The StarClan has more of the side you need to match than the warrior does.

In terms of placement, the pale parts on the belly and paws need to be receded 22:56, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

There's a little waste around the ear and fur patches on the hind legs, I believe some near tip of the tail. He generally seems much duller to me, the stripes seem to be much thicker here than his other images, there should be more stripes, The pale on the face extends too far across the cheek, The pale parts of the paws does not extend as far up here as on his other images, The pale on the chest and belly should be reduced a considerable amount. The pink to show the skin where the patchy fur is is also a fairly different color here, than on his other images, and this seems a little nitpicky, I thought I'd mention it. SquidwardPlays 23:04, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Also, your image was aligned to the left. don't do that. SquidwardPlays 23:05, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

You've improved so much Owlbite! Can you add some depth to his skin patches? —

I can't see any shading through my screen. might be just me? -- Silverfur   skz  [ 09:31, 12/10/2018 ]

I dont get what you mean by, aligned to the left, and on the other 2, the patchy fur was a difrent color, I am not working on my computer,  so I cant work now, but I can fix the problems! (Please call me TrasH, I am more used to that and was questioning who you were talking about!)

You forgot to sign! Please thin out the stripes (this was said in a comment above, not sure if you saw it). The stripes are thinner on his Warrior and StarClan.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:27, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

I agree, the stripes should be thinner and there should be more stripes added to the body. Minkclaw You're my person 22:32, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, the hyphen in the file name needs to be a colon. Please lighten him up (I said this in a comment). The stripes need to be orange. Right now they're goldenrod (not sure how else to describe them). Don't forget adding depth to the skin, Echo mentioned that. Potato Flakin (talk) 22:40, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Flamepelt (T) ~ For Approval
I understand now. I used his warrior for reference since that was the first in the set. I have no idea what I did with him. I feel like I threw my tablet pen around dkskjffd —

I assume this is shading of some sort on the head, and while I don't know if it really is, it seems very off-putting for me, because of how dark and randomly placed it is, if that makes sense. SquidwardPlays 00:21, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:58, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

I took the ear pink straight from the warrior, and I'll redo the head shading in a bit ^^ —

Alright! Also, Potato, the earpinks just fine. I checked, and it does match the warrior. If it's desaturated, it'll match neither of his pixels. SquidwardPlays 01:02, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this looks better!! Head shading is always hard for me for some reason.. —

Plumclaw (T) - For Approval
I'm going to fix some of the issues, I just wanted to hear what you guys thought on this. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:10, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

could just be me thinking this, but the shading seems like it could use a wee bit of darkening/defining. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 00:11, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Nah, I agree with you. ^ —

re-ups I tried but any darkening of the shading looks very awkward on my screen, hope this is okay Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 00:19, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the ear pink a bit? 00:24, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups earpink is the bane of my existence. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 17:12, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye color and the shading on the ear furthest from us. In addition, the stomach shading looks kind of blotchy (especially near the front leg). Can you smooth it out? 17:40, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Pebble (CG) - For Approval
i was bored so i did another charart, and nobody else was doing her, so eh, why not. Not nearly the best i can do though, it feels kind of lackluster, especially the mud. If anyone agrees that i should fix the mud, i'll probably mess around with it then, since i'm not too happy with it anyway. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:07, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

I think this looks good! There's shading leaking away from the lower haunch shading. 01:16, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Messed around with the mud, I'm much happier with it. also touched up lower haunch shading. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:30, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define the face/head shading. 03:09, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:16, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front limbs and chest? 15:46, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the back and tail look overly dark compared to the shading on the rest of the image. Try to even out the darkness. 17:44, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:10, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Kill the waste outside the back.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:30, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (CG) - For Approval
I absolutely love how this turned out!!! The lineart was a challenge but it was kind of fun. 03:38, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on his haunch? <span style="color:#3D061F; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #F9137C; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw You're my person 22:17, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Kill the waste outside the paws.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:28, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I searched for the waste but couldn't find any.. I just ran the eraser tool around the feet a few times. 22:49, December 10, 2018 (UTC)