Warriors Wiki talk:Books

Canon
Hey so I found this page floating around with no project on it, and it seemed more PB oriented than anything so I thought to pop it in here. Ik it's with the category of Role Play Phenomenon, and everything else from there has been deleted, but... couldn't it be revamped? I wanted to pose the question here of whether it should be deleted like the rest of the category, or made a part of PB and revamped/ add new stuff and such. Thoughts?

Yea, I agree with that. It is information for the reader and it should be in PB. 14:55, 4/22/2017 14:55, April 22, 2017 (UTC)ggC1ND3R_STR1P3

Me too. It does contain many PB-related articles. --  17:35, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

I think it should be revamped and made part of PB. 16:14 Sun May 7

It looks like everyone supports the page being revamped. Any other comments? 23:34 Sun May 14

Okay, looks like everyone agrees to revamping it. How should we go about it? I say we keep what's there + add the facts that we now take stuff from Kates blog and Vicky + add cites for the definition of canon from wikipedia, and maybe include a dropdown or some kind of image/graphic/template depicting the series, the canon books, or just something else significant. Just something book related to tie it to PB.

Head's up, I got a nice idea for this, but I'm at work and can't type it up. I'll comment more after my doctor's appointment later. Just letting y'all know to hold off for a little bit so I can chime in.

OKAY a few days late, but sorry, things came up. I think we could revamp the page, but I'm not totally sure what exactly we'd be taking from Kate's blog or Vicky's Facebook pages? Would we take them saying what information is canon and all of that? Because honestly, it wouldn't hurt to at least mention the role play aspect, but mention that this is a place for strict canon information only? Having a definition of what canon is, what counts as a valid canon source, ect, would be an excellent idea. I'm not sure, though, exactly how big you'd want this page to be? We could actually tie it into all projects and just keep it as a general "canonical information" page, or something along those lines... it doesn't have to be just for PB if all projects can benefit from it.

Ah yeah, I meant saying on the page that we take info from Kate's Blog/Vicky's Facebook as canon, and all of that. It'd almost act as a cite guide, even though it isn't really one. I like the idea of tying it into all of the projects, but I also think it should be linked to one project in particular to receive a silver grade. Perhaps that project should be PR instead of PB, though, if we're including more real life aspects than not.

Yes, that's basically what I meant. Although, if we're going to shift this to PR, I would highly suggest having everything ready first, due to PR often being forgotten and too small to get maybe more than a comment or two. A page like this should...really have more than one or two agreeing comments and an actual discussion. Icy is also without a computer for a little while, so I'd suggest also going to poke her once you've decided what to do with it, that way she knows to comment. Does anyone have a rough draft of what they'd want it to look like, or are we going to follow the layout used on other pages?

Poking my head in and mentioning I am still without a laptop so please don't yell at me. But may I be messaged once you all have a good idea of where the conversation is going? I will not be able to check the Wiki as often. 02:35, June 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah of course we can message you :)^^ My idea for the format was a version of Warriors Books in that we have a blurb up top that says something like 'Canon is what is considered real.. etc. and is determined by x, y, or z' and that we have different sections and sub-sections for each topic. Those topics could be like what cites we take, specifically which wording of cites we take from Vicky's Facebook and Kate's Blog, and then what counts from the books, erin hunter chats, etc. and stuff.

Are there any more comments on this? 01:29, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

Crookedstar's Promise/Chapter 3 ~ Silver Nomination
Credit who worked on it. Also, question. How many articles are we allowed to have up on the talk page and in the forums together? Im assuming it's three? 18:40, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

Just popping in to say for PB you can have as many nominations up as you like, for PC you can only have three. :P 16:20, July 28, 2017 (UTC)

Can you remove the period after 'jaw' in the main quote?

Oh, also, can you make Oakkit a major character? I know it's more of an opinion thing but from the summary he seems to be a major part of this chapter (and from what I remember in the book, he was major). If you disagree though, it's fine.

Updated 18:59, July 28, 2017 (UTC)

This is gonna be a wall, but:
 * In the first paragraph, "He suggest the go exploring" 'the' should be 'they'
 * "Nearby, Beetlekit wakes, strugging to his paws. He asks if it's time to eat yet." Maybe combine these sentences, as they seem kind of stubby.
 * Oakkit seems a little redundant in the first paragraph.
 * Perhaps add a link to camp in the first paragraph?
 * Rainflower, Stormkit, and Oakkit are redundant in the second paragraph, try to replace some of those with pronouns or descriptive terms.
 * Second paragraph, "slithered" should be "slithers", "saw" should be "see"
 * Second paragraph, I believe there should be a comma after Brambleberry.
 * "They want to collect coltsfoot with her but she says that they need to be apprentices before they go out of camp." Add a comma before the word 'but'
 * "But this doesn't stop Stormkit to sneak out of camp." Reword this sentence, right now it seems awkward and grammatically incorrect.
 * "They spot Goosefeather but thinks that he wasn't worth the trouble." I don't think this sentence is worded correctly? Maybe try "They spot Goosefeather, but think he's not worth the trouble" Also, trouble of what? May add a sentence or a phrase explaining that?
 * Third paragraph, reaches should be reach, chased should be chases. In the same sentence, add a comma after the word 'them'.

Reuploaded 04:09, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Spottedleaf's Heart/Chapter 9 ~ Silver Nomination
00:18, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Thunderstar's Echo/Chapter 9 ~ Silver Nomination
At last Thunderstar has kits! <3