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Oakfur (R) - For Approval
guess who's back from hiatus hell 14:59 Sun Jan 29

Define the shading/light source. 19:41 Sun Jan 29

re-ups 20:58 Sun Jan 29

I feel like the shading should go up higher along the edge of the hip. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 21:58, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

re-ups 00:27 Wed Feb 1

Could you give a bit of shape to the shading? Right now it just seems like there's a whole bunch of light on the top part of the cat... unless that was intentional. Which, if it was, disregard my message.

Yeah, that was intentional on my part. 16:17 Sun Feb 5

I think the shading should still go up higher along the edge of the hip. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:48, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

re-ups 00:25 Wed Feb 8

CBA?

Okay, gotta backtrack, I'm sorry. It was found out that Oakfur's "dark brown" description was false, and we have to now use the cite we do have, which is light brown. I'm sorry again, but you'll need to match this now. x.x

Stonewing (Ro) - CBA
Here's my second. :] 23:59, January 31, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Define the shading on the fank and maybe smooth it out a bit?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 00:00, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Blur/smudge the shading 00:25, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

​Reuploaded 02:40, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more. 00:22, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:57, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Gonna sound like a broken record, but you'll still need to smooth out the shading a fair bit more.

Reuploaded 18:36, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading (or light, whatever works) on the tail. 00:31, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''​Thanks for the advice, David. I defined the light. 00:59, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Wrenflight (Star) ~ For Approval
took way too long 02:57, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Nice texture! It looks like there's black at the edge of her eye-to the left or whatever-and I think it could be lightened❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 03:01, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

That's eye depth, Apple. Anyways, smoothen out the shading on the chest, this (-->) side. :) 03:14, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

I realized :/ Blur the texture a tiny bit❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 13:31, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Reuploaded  23:01, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the texture just a tiny bit? The lines don't seem to be nearly as sharp on her other two images. 00:21, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:11, February 2, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's me or not, but smooth out the shading?BrokenFoot 19:59, February 3, 2017 (UTC)Broken_Foot

Reuploaded I think it's fine, but... 01:50, February 4, 2017 (UTC)

Could be smoothed out a fair bit more; remember, it should be more gradient-like, but this, for lack of a better phrase, cuts off.

Reuploaded 20:21, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think it could be lightened a little, the darkness doesn't look quite right as it is. and the shading on the head could curve with the head itself a bit more. 00:31, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:32, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth of the shading a little? I also think it wouldn't hurt to expand it a little farther downwards on the face. 13:44, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Add amber eyes, as per the cite on her page

Slatepaw (A) ~ For Approval
Quite a while to get the shading right, but I am still not confident about it. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:37, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the shading at all, darken it. Also define the eye depth.❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 22:49, February 1, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Define the texture. At first, I couldn't tell tell that it had texture at all. 23:06, February 1, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tell me if it is still difficult to spot the shading / texture, becausee I can't set my laptop to the right amount of brightness and darkness. Shadowbright67 (talk) 07:44, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more, I still can't really see it. 13:32, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink a bit :) 02:14, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think part of the head is warped? their right ear looks odd. 00:29, February 8, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Realized the navigator showed exactly what it would look like not from my laptop, and I thought I already showed the updated version. Also, I'm not too sure about the ear. Shadowbright67 (talk) 02:10, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and smooth the shading on the legs/paws. 23:50, February 9, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 'I cannot tell whether I just updated it into the same ''file as it was between February 9 and now. If so, I will do the changes tomorrow / Sunday. (I am pretty sure I replaced the old file on the folder anyway.) Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:25, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Softwing (Star) - CBA
Eh 20:21, February 5, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me, but the pupil in the left (ours) eye looks like its crooked, and kinda making the cat look cross-eyed? I think it's the difference in the pupil length. Maybe shift the left one over and lengthen it, or reduce the pupil size in the right? Idk, I may just the wrong, someone can decide. {: 02:17, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried shortening the pupil in the right eye. Did that help at all? 02:27, February 7, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:21, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Star (CG) - CBA
I never thought I'd get to try one of these ~

Crop the image. There's way too much extra space on <- side of the image.

Reuploaded

I will probably get shot for this, but I'm gonna CBA this. It's very stunning and you've done quite well given these blanks are a pain to shade.

Flower (Lo) (KP) - CBA
Based on my Aunt Kathy's old cat, Maia. Comments? 13:28, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

I love this pattern. Mind adding some more depth to the shading? Especially on the hip, tail and leg. 17:15, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Can you dull the orange just a bit? 21:19, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the ear-pink (If it's fine, just ignore me) ErmineGlow (talk) 23:20, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:41, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the tail shading. Also, it seems to just cut off when it reaches up to the rear and by the < back leg. 02:25, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:28, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the orange is a bit too bright. 13:45, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also blurred the shading a bit, as it seemed kind of blotchy/hard-edged in places. 20:10, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

I like this. CBA?

Hate to break CBA, but I think the shading needs to be darkened and defined more 01:01, 2/13/2017

Reuploaded. Redid the shading. Also, I'd rather not go darker than this. 02:38, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

It was fine, but y'know. I'm gonna re-CBA this.

Plumclaw (Q) ~ For Evaluation
My first pixel

Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 16:22, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think this needs a date and reservation on the chart

I reserved her. Reuploaded Starry Cat 19:03, Feb 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 20:37, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Wolfstep (Star) - For Approval
Precious boy — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:27, February 10, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the white, especially on the paws. 01:29, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Remove the alignments. 02:23, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the right paw. 02:27, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  11:36, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Could you add a little more shading on the <-- side of the face, on the part of the flank that hits the back? Just a little touch, since with your light source there'd be a tad further up

Reuploaded  — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  19:55, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Could you brighten the ear pink just a tad? I'm having issues making it out from the pelt.... unless that's my eyes again. =/

Reuploaded - Nah, it probably could've be lightened. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:09, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

This needs to be longhaired, as per the cite on his page

Reuploaded — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:52, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Aww, that stinks. I liked him short-haired. Smudge/blur/smooth out the shading on the white tail-tip?

Reuploaded - Yeah, I thought he looked better short-haired too. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  21:05, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Running Fox (Kit) - For Approval
Alright I messed up the first time because I accidentally posted it in approved, so sorry about that lol. Not very good at navigating my way around the wiki. Homosneksual (talk) 02:37, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

It's fine, I understand. However, you need to go here and reserve the image first, and the name of the image should also be File:Running Fox.kit.png. As for the image, define the shading and the red speckles, please. 02:44, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Homosneksual (talk) 03:16, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading and blur/smooth the --> ear pink. And don't align your images. His description makes me think of a cat with chicken pox lol 03:20, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Is there white in the eyes? Also, smudge/blur the earpink in the ---> ear 03:21, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded There's white in the eyes, but only one pixel which acts as the glare. Homosneksual (talk) 03:42, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge ear pink a bit more, the one towards the right? Doesn't really reach the lineart. Also, smudge shading a bit on the neck and above left leg. Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:22, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Homosneksual (talk) 03:11, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on <- leg.

Reuploaded Homosneksual (talk) 23:48, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
16:49, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the depth in the eyes a bit? And possibly define the light/shading on the face?

Hollystar (L) - For Approval
~Patch   feather~   04:09, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the tail-tip? 04:11, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the ginger a bit? At first I thought it was light brown. Very pretty! 13:47, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I was thinking it looked a little too brown. Does it look any lighter now? When I was editing it it looked better, but now that I've uploaded it, it looks almost the same to me. ~Patch   feather~   14:11, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps brighten it a bit more? Still seems a bit dark, but that could very well be the shading in this case.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Ah, i found the problem. My files were all messed up... ~Patch   feather~   21:23, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Birchstar (WC) (L) ~ For Approval
this is really lazy lul 14:49, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

I can't really see the stripes? Is that just the color they are or is it my eyes again?

face n tail, can see them pretty well on comp and phone. 04:55, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems very blotchy on the -> foot, and maybe the one beside it. 05:05, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:44, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Meadowpelt (MC) ~ For Approval
How do you grass 20:39, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Okay, now that's a neat description to have. Could you smooth out the tail shading and... hmm, maybe soften the stripes just a bit?

Reups I agree. ^^ 21:13, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Added some texture because I wanted to get some more practice with that 17:23, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

The tail shading still cuts off a bit too abruptly. Could you smooth it out more?

Reups Derp my second layer of shading was exceeding too far. XP 17:36, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Ivystar (L) ~ For Approval
Heyhey, long time no see peeps 00:58, 2/13/2017

Emberstar (L) - For Approval
01:29, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think they should only be on his back, shouldn't they? 01:43, 2/13/2017
 * idk it seemed unrealistic to me that they'd just stop at his back. Like with Lightningpelt we extended his white steak along his tail nevermind, that got revised lol 02:39, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:43, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Lightningpaw (Star) - For Approval
If y'all didn't expect me to take another cat with "Lightning" as their prefix, ho-boy, you may want to rethink your stance on me.

Re-uploaded because color + white tweaking.

Brindlestar (L) - For Approval
She has almost the same description as my dog lol. BTW, brindle=black on base. Not making the brindling ginger. 13:25 Mon Feb 13

Very stupid question, but is the nose black? I can't tell. Also, this is really neat jfc.

Yup it's pure black lol. I think the shading just makes it hard to distinguish. And thanks :3 13:38 Mon Feb 13

Wee Hen (Rogue) ~ For Evaluation
Hmm......Comments? 20:45, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

Owlstar (CotC) (L) - For Approval
20:51, February 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think this file needs to be renamed as "Owlstar_(CotC)" Ignore me if I'm wrong. 20:58, February 13, 2017 (UTC)