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Dappletail (Q) - Tweaked
OA is me. Tweaked to have white patches. Is there any chance I'd be allowed to tweak the pattern to match more (this is one of my first chararts, and I've been wanting to make it match better for ages), and redo the shading? And if so, does anyone have the file for the others they'd be willing to send me? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:47, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

I guess the pattern could be fixed up more. However, I think the shading looks fine 07:06, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

She's supposed to have white eye rings. 12:22, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

I'll fix the pattern and add white eye rings on the next update. The shading is really old and not well shaped (if that makes sense) and obscures too much of the pattern, and doesn't fit how I've come to improve in shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:59, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, go ahead and tweak her to match more and if you think you can make her look better, you're more than welcome to. 01:53, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, but I agree about the pattern. 04:35, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 03:05, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm... I think the patches should flow more with the body, and should be smudged more. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:09, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, still working, I'll get the reup posted tonight. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:00, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Does anyone have the file for one of the other Dappletail images that I could use, by chance? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can finally look at this without cringing in shame. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:10, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Olivenose (A) ~ Redone
OA was Leafstrikeasura, redone to remove the white 11:43, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

The pattern's not really matching the warrior's right now. It's hard to describe the exact steps you'd need to take to fix it. Would you like me to send you the file so you can get a better view at what the pattern looks like without shading?

Could you tell me if the pattern was blurred or smudged? 01:52, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Neither. It was simply drawn. Smudging would make it a bit too messy. Depending on what program you use, blurring might work if the brush engine isn't as good as photoshop's.

However the placement of the markings are also off, probably because the markings in the shadows are a bit hard to make out on the warrior. I'd highly reccomended taking a look at the warrior's file.

Re-uploaded I tried 03:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Add more markings to the paws, muzzle, and chest. Maybe define the markings a bit on the back and the haunch. Smudge the earpink on the closer ear, and maybe add some shading for depth as well. Also, to match the color of the markings on the warrior, you'll either need to use a highlight layer similar to the one in the file, or use a different color that's closer to what the warrior's looks like with the shading.

Just saying, but not everyone uses highlights, nor does anyone have to use them. 03:21, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Hence why I said they could also change the color of the markings. It's a color thing, not a lighting thing. The highlights just happened to be a big factor in the final color on the warrior, so taking the marking color on there and not putting highlights doesn't work, it'd need to be a different color.

Re-uploaded I tried 03:03, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

The marking color's still a bit off. Maybe saturate it a bit? And the earpink still needs to be smudged/blurred.

Re-uploaded I'm not sure if this did anything. I forgot about the ear pink i'll get to that later 09:00, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Fircone (Star) - Tweaked
just removed the white 21:08, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:25, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

This is just a tweak. All she did was remove the white layer in the file. The shading on there now was already approved, there's no need for it to be changed.

Every single time there are images that are tweaked, they get other criticism that seemed to not have passed during their time. Look above. Rainlegs should not be an expection to this case. Whether an image was nominated for removing torn ears, someone can comment and tell them to fix something else. 00:03, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I stand corrected on that matter. I hadn't realized that it's a normal thing these days to edit unrelated things while tweaking. As far as I remember, that wasn't usually accepted when I was active. I can't say I agree with it being done now, but my opinion on it isn't relevant if it's something accepted by the project. However, I do still disagree that the shading should be defined. It looks defined enough. Though maybe it could be thickened on the back just a tad?

I think it needs to be defined, I can hardly see it, even on my phone. 17:05, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I agree it should be defined. 22:35, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:38, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Fircone (Ro) ~ Redone
Soo I lost the file for this. How the hell did I do the pattern before O_o OA was Rainlegs, Skt (I think?), and a redo by me. Redone because of the tortie vote. 18:11, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file? Some of the colors look a bit too orange/yellow. 19:30, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, please. Although I think some of the problem is the highlights. 20:34, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Stonefur (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA is Atelda and with a tweak by Bbun. Tweaked to untear an ear. 00:29, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

"tweaked to untweak an ear" fave. Also excuse me for being nitpicky but on the ear you unteared there's like, a white mark in it? Can you fix that? If not that is cool. 01:28, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Oh that's an ear scar but I can remove it if you think it shouldn't be there. 05:08, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

It just looks a little odd to me, for some reason. Could you make it a more... darker color? I'm sorry, it just looks like a white streak. (Apologize if it sounds offensive!) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:07, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 01:51, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Lo) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked to make shading darker. I've gotten a lot better at shading during the time that I've been away, but give me your critiques if I've somehow overlooked something! 07:39, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you expand the light on the tail? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:00, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA’s are Iceheart22 Stoneclaw33 and tweakers are Mount Everest and Ducksplash. Tweaked to remove underbite. 07:50, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lets see... Could you add more light on the main body? I don't know, it just seems really dark. Nice job! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:03, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the light on the main body is fine. 10:04, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I still think it could be defined on the legs a little bit, if not on the main body. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:05, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

???...second...well...another opinion please? 01:47, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:51, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think the light on the legs could be defined- it looks like the entire thing is in shadow.

Reupload Wouldn't hurt to do it anyway. 02:12, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) - Withdrawn
??? I'm sorry if it looks awful, I just can't /see/ him on the screen so I'm literally doing it with peering eyes. 03:18, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the belly shading, as the white is looking very    gray. 19:23, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 20:44, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing. This can be archived if there are no other comments, but if there are comments I'm not going to work on them, so someone else can take over. 00:46, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Q) - Redone
technically redone but used the alt queen file. OA is Hawky and bless her for letting me have this image. ilysm <3 Also the tail looks different due to this being a front view of the tail, while the rest of the blanks are side views.

The black spot on her forehead should match the kittypet, and same for the one below 12:19, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Technically it's not supposed to, but I'm not in the mood to argue or retweak the kittypet and StarClan images.

Turtle Tail (Ro) - Redone


Re-uploaded.

Rain That Passes Quickly (E) (Alt) - Tweaked
I do understand I may have to blur the shading more. OAs were Iceheart, Sweetflower, and Rowanflight. Tweaked for define shading, and unsaturated scars/earpink 12:21, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, honestly. Also, it's Rowanflight, not Rowanheart.

reups 12:55, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. 16:08, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Brackenpelt (W) - Tweaked
OA be Beebs. 13:17, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

the colour doesnt seem to fit in.....maybe add some more ginger over it. 18:50, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrow Fur (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Bbun, redone to match Turtle Tail. The original one is 23452328364853762583 times better...

Define the shading. 16:44, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Olivenose (Star) ~ Redone
OA was Bbun, redone to be a non-calico. again Splook feel free to take it back if you want

Hawkfrost (DF) ~ Tweaked
I was the OA. White chest had to be removed. 16:42, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) ~ Tweaked
the OA of the new blank version was Beebs, tweaked to remove white. 16:58, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I can still see a little bit of white on the tail tip 18:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (L) - Tweaked
Best cat is here. Gray Wing is love. Gray Wing is life. Love Gray Wing forever. OA was Raven, he needed to be darker. Comments on best cat? 19:01, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (Q) - Redone
Omg I'm so proud of this. OA was StormSongz :p 22:29, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
OA/tweaker is Mounty, tweaked to darken which I just saw I did too much. Will reupload in a few minutes. 00:02, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

reupped 00:04, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Not quiiite. The original OA is Blackclaw09, and then Ivy tweaked the nose. I then redid it, and then Mounty tweaked for the ragged fur and shading after an unsuccessful tweak. I remember this image in particular and the hassle it was for me to shade it right...