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Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
RECLAIM! Anyways, just touched up little Quailie, and added a bit of criticism from the other Quailkit for approval. --

The white still needs to be dulled quite a bit. It's way too bright. Could you also smudge/smooth it out? 14:16, 11/27/2016

The colors on this need to match the other image. 15:49, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Like Waterclaw said, colors need to match, especially ear pink, eyes and pelt color. Sorry if this is repeating. Winterpaw:  I am  a  true Monster  22:40, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Colors no longer have to match, due to the other image being withdrawn. Could you smooth out the shading a bit? It abruptly cuts off, or so it seems, and it should be a bit smoother on the body and tail.

Re-uploaded TFW you leave your computer alone for a minute to get food and the next you almost upload a charart with a gun above it because your brother graffitied over your art --

Blur the chest shading a tad. It's a bit too sharp. 03:28, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Brightened the belly 'cause I noticed it was way too dull and I had trouble seeing it. --

Smooth out the shading a bit more in general. 21:36, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

I know you don't have to match the other image, but if this one has white on the bottom of the chest like the last one (I can't tell), then maybe lighten the shading on the white so we can see it better? If there isn't white there, then ignore this. :P Also, smooth out the shading on the shading on the tail, and have it follow the curve of the tail more, and not quite the sharp curve that it's on now that has the entire tip cast in shadow, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:29, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded it's actually the belly, not the bottom of the chest, Jayie. If I got my way, Quailkit would have a much bigger belly than he does RN, but other PCA'ers disagreed. I want a bigger area, sniffle sniffle. I also tried to do the tail as depicted in Sunjaw's guide, but it's long-haired, so I tried...? my best to do it as a shorthair. --

I think with this shading placement, there should be more shading at the top of the back. Can you add some there please? Also, smudge/blur the ear pink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:08, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload --

Nice^ Perhaps define the eye depth some.

Re-upped Re-upped? Is that a word? --

Add some shading to the top of the head? Also, I might nit picking here, but I think the shadings a little solid. Lighten/blur/smudge a little?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:07, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

I think it needs to be darkened a bit, seems too light. TawnyBracken (talk) 18:40, December 16, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

i think the shading could use a little more depth to it maybe? 16:42, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tell me how I could increase the depth with a depth layer, please? --

You could add a second layer of shading, with the second layer covering only the parts where the shading should be darker. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:42, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:30, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) - For Evaluation
Alright, my second attempt for a Charart. I saw another image named this...was that declined? Probably, because it wasn't on his page. Anyways, I hope this looks good. 06:50, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

The other one was withdrawn. Define the shading and make the earpink less purple-ish if you're able to. And please, don't align your images. Remove the |left code off the image, if you can't seem to figure it out. 07:06, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do all of that tomorrow. Just a question, why does the ear color have to be less purple? It looks pink enough to me, but I'm down with whatever. Opinions, anyone? 07:09, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Too much of a purple hue can make it look more bubblegum than earpink, and it looks a little unnatural. I think it could use a little more pink. 10:55, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:48, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

I swear the fur and ear pink looks a little purple.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

It doesn't look purple to me at all...? 00:23, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

To me, it does look pretty purple, especially the earpink and eyes. maybe also make the body shading curve more with the shape of the cat; it seems very unnatural for placement right now.

The eye are supposed to be purple. Is purple eyecolor not allowed? I swear I've seen it before. Also, I don't understand what you mean by "curve more with the shape"? 00:32, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Any eye color is allowed^^ The earpink is really kinda ear purple on this, though. And curve with the shape means making it not be as blocky and flow with the cat. Kinda like this. On this, it seems very square, and cats aren't blocky, per say.

Reuploaded 01:28, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Uh, I don't think purple eyes are allowed. We've always asked people to change that, and I've been forced myself to change that. Unless they are cited with purple eyes, it's very much considered unnatural and not permitted. =/

To me, the ear pink looks a little bright. 17:00, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded  20:47, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

The ear pink is still pretty purple... 02:57, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading as well 02:58, December 19, 2016 (UTC)]

Reuploaded 04:28, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main part of the body, but mainly along the spine. Also, the tail shading could use a bit of smoothing as well.

Reuploaded 21:36, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define the earpink and smooth out the shading on the back leg closest to us. I also think the shading could use a bit more depth. 00:19, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:18, December 24, 2016 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:31, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Branch (HJ) (Ki) - For Approval
dont we all love it when our art programs hate us and our siblings pester us and we need food 23:15, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart, and it also needs to be named in the correct format to File:Branch (HJ).kit.png.

Donee 23:27, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

It only says "Branch.ki.png, are you missing the t? Also, define the earpink a little, I can barely see it. 23:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading as well, and add a bit more depth to it. 05:58, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaddedd  21:34, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading again please. It's still hardly noticeable. (btw I love the design you gave him!) 21:39, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink again as well; I couldn't see it on mobile or laptop very well.

Reuploaded  03:19, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink some more.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:58, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the stripes some? i'm having trouble making them out throught the shading 16:39, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

reeupploaaddeddd  04:15, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 18:07, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Please wait for at least five days before asking for comments. With activity how it is, three days isn't a good enough span of time. That being said, what's going on with the ear pink in <- ear? it looks unsmudged and like it was... idk, kinda sharpened and it seems to have these pixels at the end of the ear that look a bit off?

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't know about the rule change >.< 22:52, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 21:39, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define --> ear pink.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:10, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Dewpaw (HJ) (Ki) - CBA
00:07, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the tail shading?

Re-uploaded. 21:19, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) - for approval
All layers from her apprentice image. <span style="">13:55 Sun Dec 18

Maybe smooth out the facial shading just a bit? Also, is this intentionally left sharp? I'm not sure how your shading style works for these blanks.

Blur/Smudge the shading just a tiny bit. 19:22, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Marshkit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Meh. PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 16:07, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

This has to match the StarClan image.

It looks as though he has tabby paws, maybe take out the lines? Shypaw11 (talk) 16:51, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

They have to remove the lines anyways; editing the lineart isn't allowed on this wiki for PCA images. They can't alter the paws by adding extra lines.

Redone.PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 17:05, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

I still see lines on the paws, and I can't see the texture on this at all. The StarClan image has it, so this one needs it as well.

Redone PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 17:27, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Thin out the texture and contour it more to the shape of the image. It looks more akin to mottling right now. Use a 1px brush. That tends to help. <span style="">18:38 Sun Dec 18

Redone PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 18:49, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading please 01:37, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Redone PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 01:59, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define your light source? I can't tell which direction the light is hitting, and it all looks kinda shaded.

Redone PrettyPuppy40 (talk) 21:39, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Mind smudging the earpink just a bit? 03:41, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

This is too blotchy, but I like the paw color! Great job other then the texture! TawnyBracken (talk) 17:58, December 21, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Tawny the texture is supposed to match the StarClan image. 20:51, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail and paws

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:30, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Finpaw (Ki) ~ CBA
All colors are from his apprentice image. Comments? 21:39, December 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit.

Reuploaded. 01:47, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink? I know the colors are the same, but I'm having issues seeing the ear pink on this image, and it looks like it's all the same shade as the base... which I know that's not the case.

Reuploaded. 04:38, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 18:11, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:31, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Duckkit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Welp, looks decent. Comments? 01:38, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading please. 03:38, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

I think he needs a tail similar to his father. 14:46, December 20, 2016 (UTC)

I can't see a pupil in the eyes?

That tail doesn't look good. ;-; 20:22, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little too neon. And can you try to make the tail thinner like his father's? 20:54, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 21:01, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste by the <-- paw

Redone 21:49, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. It's still pretty flat.

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:32, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Yarrowleaf (Ro) - CBA
23:34, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Looking great! Define the light on the tail please. 00:02, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:25, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 21:52, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? 01:27, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Patchfoot (E) ~ For Approval
First elder and black-and-white cat. Who knew shading this would be so hard? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  14:49, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

White's looking gray. Also, define the shading on the black. 20:03, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

The patches look too over-blurred and define the ear-pink 21:01, December 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Anywhere where the white looks gray is where there is shading. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  14:41, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

The patches are still looking overblurred compared to the other images.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:33, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Mudthorn (Star) - For Approval
Too bad no one cares about him lol. 00:20, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

This is good! However, there's some waste all along the tail.

Nightslash Da Warrior of Shadowclan rar 03:27, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you, but I didn't see any waste? Perhaps I'm not seeing it. 19:15, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Have more shading along the edge of the tail? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 03:41, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reups. Expanded the shading on the tail. 04:43, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just me but the colour of the fur doesn't seem to match the warrior.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:34, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Luna (KP) ~ For Approval
23:01, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Great job on the eye color and pelt markings! I can find no fault/NTI in this! Amazing!TawnyBracken (talk) 02:02, December 27, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Tawny, please only comment critiques about the artwork. You can't just say "nice job" and leave. Anyway, the brown looks too black on the face. Or maybe that's just shading. Either way, can you please lighten it? 02:07, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Tawny 17:30, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job! Is there meant to be earpink on the --> ear? If so, I cannot see it (probably not supposed to O.o) also, the light source of the tail doesn't match the rest of the body.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:36, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Birdwing(Q) ~ For Approval


Pretty! The shading looks paintbrushy (is that a word?)<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:38, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't quite sure what to do so I lightened the shading a few ticks and tried to smooth it out a little though it probably didn't help much

Clovertail (E) ~ For Approval
Wait should I put 'For Approval' since my first one got approved? 02:40, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah you can. And, the white isn't supposed to be on the chest at all - only on the legs. Her other images were tweaked for that awhile back, actually. Nice image^^