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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots

Honeyleaf (Ro) - For Approval
Won't be able to reupload Mon-Fri because I'm going camping.  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 15:23, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker and softer, looking at her deputy and loner. 15:25, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Expand the shading on the tail and the foreleg furthest from us. 21:04, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body and haunch area, bit sharp there. The shading everywhere else though looks fine. You're doing a great job so far! 21:58, July 7, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the waste beside the hind leg closest to us.  Crystie  Can't help loving  me  01:43, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah sorry, should be reuploaded by tomorrow. <font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 19:36, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Smooth the shading a bit on the shoulder and hind leg closest to us? Nice work! 03:22, July 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups

There's shading leaking from the lineart on the paws, and smooth the shading on the flank/stomach? 00:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the haunch and all legs except for the front leg farthest from us. 22:24, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Define the light on the main body and haunch more, amd smooth out the shading on the front leg closest to us. 14:21, July 20, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yes. I'm on holiday at the moment, will be back and reupload tomorrow. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 07:29, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. W) ~ CBA
All colors from original image. Comments? 18:26, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 19:46, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but, could you define/add more depth to the chest/mane area? It looks flatter in comparison to the other darker spaces in the image

Reuploaded. 04:12, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 20:23, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) ~ For Approval
an attempt was made.. 19:02, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

She needs stripes and dapples on her tail, the base is also a tad too gingery. 19:07, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

The shading also appears very blotchy and uneven. Also, can you define the light in the eyes? 02:18, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes and dapples seem darker

Re-Uploaded! I wasn't exactly sure what you meant by the 'stripes and dapples seem darker' thought?? 14:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

seem darker on her other images. sorry, not sure why I didn't finish that sentence

The stripes/dapples appear rougher on the other images in the set. 14:26, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 15:00, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes should still be a little rougher. On the MC they look like they were smudged back and forth some. 02:00, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Lionheart (W) ~ CBA
No joke this took hours but it's finally done. I was a bit confused which stripes to match...since the set doesn't really match exactly so I guessed rip. 19:24, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the old warrior+deputy before the deputy blank redos are the first in this set. ​​

seems like the only other image that shows this side is the star.

I used a mix of the star, old warrior, and apprentice when creating the pattern. I attempted to go off the star for some (mostly the legs, face, and some of the tail), but as I looked closer, I am convinced the stripe style doesn't match. The stripes are overblurred, and more linear/streakier on the star, rather than the irregular and bulbous shapes on the other images. But if others disagree, I can always give it another shot. ^^ 17:00, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, I'd match the old warrior/deputy and apprentice instead of the Star, 'cause it doesn't match these other images closely as it should.

Also, should the lineart for his mane match Bluestar's one for his alt. warrior per the new ruling?

Uhhh...that's Lionblaze's alt. 20:30, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Whoops, half asleep when I noticed that - don’t mind me 😅

CBA? 15:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lioneye (Ki) ~ For Approval


21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

The stripe color seems a bit off (could be my eyes), and the stripes also appear sharper and rougher (instead of smooth and sleek) as well. 02:20, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

21:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes that I have on the unknown file is #d28121, they look a little too pale on this. The earpink looks a bit darker too, could you make it a little brighter? 03:39, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) ~ For Approval


21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined + smoothed a little 02:05, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Plumwillow (Alt. W 3) - For Approval
how did they make her ginger 21:35, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

She's honestly supposed to be Honeypaw lol Can you define the eye depth? 03:47, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  then they should have made her Honeyplum lol -- 03:52, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

If it helps, the hex code for the ginger to match the manga is #EC7B32, which is just ever-so-slightly different to what you've got at the moment. :D

can you lighten the eye color some? I can't really tell it apart from the pupil <span style="">07:12 Wed Jul 24

Reuploaded  -- 22:09, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the flank and front legs? There also appears to be some shading leakage on the tail. --<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 14:31, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 21:57, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Morning Whisker (K) - For Approval
<span style="">23:53 Mon Jul 22

Do you want the file for the star? used the same colors as Beebs' old kit, except i can't find that file anymore. There should be more brown on the face

reuploaded i dont thiiink i need the file, but if anyone thinks the colors are off i'll take it <span style="">05:39 Wed Jul 24

The white doesn't seem as smudge near the tail per the Starclanner, its a little smoother transitioning from the white into the brown.

The stripes should be thinner

reuploaded <span style="">23:04 Thu Jul 25

Lilyheart (W) - CBA
18:17, July 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think on the others of this set the stripes are a little smoother 02:09, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I also think the stripes are thinner, too, on the rest? 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 16:59, July 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? Beautiful image. 18:58, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation
it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. top left corner. 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good!

'''reuploaded. '''

Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from this version, as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... ​​​​​​

Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base​ because she was the OA. 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. ​​​​​​

'''reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? 17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, too, overall. 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail. 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? 01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

Mistystar (K) - CBA
22:51, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Almost the same comment as the warrior; define the overall shading depth, and eye depth too a little (I'm aware its a small space though)

Reuploaded  22:09, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:21, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Mistystar (W) - CBA
22:51, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

I would shrink the pupils some - and the white in them as well. It leaves little room for the eye color, and since many of the other images in this set don't have ones so large, it doesn't make sense for this one to have ones much larger since they wouldn't change.

Reuploaded  23:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could add/define the depth on the front legs? Maybe adding a third layer to add some more depth to the dark areas might help with that, as it looks a little flat at the moment. Could you also define the eye depth too?

Reuploaded I erased some depth on the front legs so hopefully it's visible now  22:09, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:20, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Leafpool (K) ~ For Approval
01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body should be thinner (you may have to add more after that), and the tips of the ears should be dark brown, too. 03:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't really be texture, just smudge lines from the stripes.

Reuploaded I might've did a thing 20:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Nightstar (K) ~ For Approval
01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little duller than the rest of the set. This looks very good! 03:40, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I color-picked off the original kit last time. I used the star for this one, so it should be better 20:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Flamepelt (W) - For Approval
04:36, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the flank. <font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 11:30, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Mistmouse (W) - For Approval
referenced the tunneler <span style="">06:13 Wed Jul 24

I think the shading could be defined and expanded some 11:09, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">23:06 Thu Jul 25

Mousewhisker (K) - CBA
does this guy... have a personality? He certainly exists 19:32, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:17, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lion's Roar (K) - CBA
19:59, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:18, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (K) - For Approval


22:41, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little and it could just be my phone but I think the shading is leaking a little at the bottom of the haunch 02:30, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Molepaw (TNP) (K) - For Approval


22:41, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the gray more? 22:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

22:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the shading just a bit more overall? 20:19, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 05:12, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Mosskit (Alt. Ki) ~ CBA
Comments? 04:10, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:52, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Nightfur (W) ~ CBA
All colors from elder. Comments? 04:10, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:53, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Mossfire (Ki) - CBA
I tried matching it to the old warrior. 04:21, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 05:04, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Leafstar (W) - CBA
an attempt made, there was. 04:21, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 05:05, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Marshcloud (K) ~ For Approval
05:15, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Mudthorn (W) ~ For Approval
His star was one of my first images, so this holds a special place dear to me! 05:15, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the front leg closest to us? --<font color="#49129b"><font face="Segoe Print"> Windsong <font color="#000000"><font face="Verdana"> Run with the wind... ❀ 07:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 20:34, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (W) - For Approval
23:45, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Larksplash (W) ~ For Approval
apparently the apprentice has no nose color? or am i blind?

Hmm, it appears the nosepink is a pale pinkish-​gray color. Could you define the shading and add some to the stomach triangle? -- 00:36, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Given that it doesn't look like there's nose color at all... I think in this case, Star can leave the nose color, and we'll just go and edit the apprentice image. I know that's not usually how things are done, but I'd rather not see images tweaked or nominated in the future for like...less than six pixels of color in some cases.

Lily (Ki) - For Approval
<3 01:54, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Jay Frost (K) - For Approval
It's been forever since I've done one of these, but since the kit blanks were redone, I wanted to spruce up Jayfrost's (and subsequently Jay Frost's) look. So here's his new design. ^^ Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 02:05, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (Ki) - For Approval
That break was definitely needed. I will eventually get to Piketooth, but I can't do him justice.

Smudge the ginger patches a bit more? 05:01, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (Alt.K) - For Approval
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Larchkit (TNP) (K) - For Approval


Soften the stripes a bit? It's not really obvious on the StarClan version, but I was going for softer stripes on the kit.... which in reality I probably should have redone the pattern on this, I really didn't like it LOL.

reuploaded how's that?

That's better, thank you. ^^

Lightleap (K) - For Approval
nabbed the apprentice file from patch to match colours and such