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Snaketail (E) - Tweaked
Can someone help me get rid of the waste? :3. It's tweaked, honest xD. Orginal artist was Ashshadow' Neede shading blurred and gray flecks on chin. Elorisa  01:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll hlp you get rid of the waste. One moment please. 01:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's some white parts on the tail, and can you blur the shading a bit more? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There ya go Elo =3 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hi there, *Was requested to get rid of re-appearing waste* One seccond, then,. ^^ . 02:06, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks really blurred to me; fix that? 02:37 Tue Dec 6

But the lineart isn't blurred; I checked xD. Before I reuploaded. -- Elorisa   13:54, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It sure looks blurred though.... And there's still empty white specks on the tail and back ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:12, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is fine, I think. Blur the highlights. 18:15, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart is blurred. I don't care that you say it isn't...it looks odd like that. Can you fix it, please? 23:09, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't even know how I'd fix it...>.> -- Elorisa   03:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make it not so dark all around the lineart. And if you truly can't do that then maybe you should withdraw this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:57, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

So I'm supposed to withdraw something because I can't do something with it...>.>. I'll just redo it. ;-; -- Elorisa   21:37, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. If you're incapable of doing what is needed, you shouldn't be working on the charart. And do you mean re-tweak it, or redo it completely? Because you still do need permission to redo completely. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Do not take on chararts that are beyond your ability. You slow down the project in doing so. Sorry if it sounds mean, but it's true. Practice chararts on your own time and then take on harder chararts in the project, but for now stick to what you can do. 16:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I retweaked it :3 -- Elorisa   21:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's a bit better. Make the gray specks smaller and blur them a bit more, and there's some white on the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this Elo? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:20, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Stormtail (W) - tweaked
Reposting, OA=Echomist - 01:10, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the earpink and blur it a little more. Much better than his old image 01:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and blur the shading a lot, it's blotchy 16:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - whatchu talking about, Sand? - 18:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, and you only have to blur the shading a tad. 19:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I just did, and I cant blur it anymore on pixlr without it being blotchy - 19:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

So, you posted it again. 8D the earpink might need to be reddened a tad. :3 Sky ☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 02:27, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, I took the color from the old image, looks fine to me - 23:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nettleclaw (W)~ Redone
It was listed for the stripes to be redone, and the shdaing was gross and there was blurred line art so i redid it. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 22:43, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my gosh, Icy, he looks amazing. Define the shading just a TAD. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the ear-pink and make it smaller. 01:12 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded- 23:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Jingo (KP) - Redone
Original artist was either Insaneular or Darkhallows and it needed to be a little less green. =3 02:47, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you bring the pupils down? She looks like she's about to pass out. 02:53, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x3 02:59, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading o.o 03:04, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to be blunt but the eyes are kinda scary o.o Maybe take them off of another image, like Smudge or Sharpclaw? Otherwise this is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:16, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Creepy eyes are so lovely though. xD Shading's been lightened and the eyes were redone =3 04:30, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dunno if the changes are showing, but if they aren't, make the pupil a bit bigger. 06:15 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded. Ack, eyes.... 23:19, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shnuky (KP) ~ Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this. She needed to be gray, not brown. OA= Sandy, tweaked by Ivystripe. Do you like the texture I gave it? xD I had fun making this one. Comments? 04:06, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Great, but she's cross eyed. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Heheh. Oops. =3 04:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mah, I hate it. XD jk. Blur the shading. Sky ☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred. ^-^ 05:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (W) - Tweaked
He looked less blue with blotchy shadings, now he looks like redone (its not!) Darkhallows is OA ,14:07,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the paws and blur all the shading. 20:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also darken the shading on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:16, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the eyes be the same color as his deputy image? 15:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I know, Im going to tweak it **dont bite me*, Reuploaded,18:58,December 13,2011 (UTC)

How come you haven't changed his eye colour yet? This, as well as his apprentice image, won't be approved until you do. 02:14, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (r) ~ Redone
Redone to match elder. OA was Flamingomom. 00:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't he supposed to have a shorter snout? And define the shading 00:28, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit, and lighten the main coat a bit to match the elder better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Colors are from the elder version. Re-Uploaded. 01:58, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tumblekit (Ki) - Redone
Ok, I found another short-haired RiverClan cat and I've put his alt on this list for tweaking as well. Among that, he was only described as a tabby and he was depicted as gray, which is not our default tabby color. Not sure who the OA was, but we've got Sandstar12 and Bramble. I really like this, I enjoy not having to copy a pattern. Comments for improvement? 00:25, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

B'aaw! Make < this ears ear-pink smaller. 01:29 Tue Dec 13

OMI GOSH! IVY! He is sooo cute!~ Blur the highlights a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Goosefeather (E) ~ Tweaked
I'd almost forgotten I'd started him! Well, I reverted the file to what I had before. Comments? 01:36, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a little! 02:17 Tue Dec 13

Shading's fine. Can you make the fur on the paws a bit less spiky though? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is just preference, but the ear closest to us doesn't look very tattered, could you possibly add a small tear at the bottom of it? Some of his ear is hidden in perspective  16:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wetfoot (W) - Tweaked


This was just a simple tweak, really it was! xD New tabby style, what do y'all think? Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, OA was Bramble, and stripes needed to be tweaked. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

What exactly was kept from the old image....? Enlarge the highlight/lighter parts. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Colors, ear-pink, eyes, all the colors? even the stripes? I mean, the only thing i did was change his stripes....thats it....i swear.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:24, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I just noticed you have 4 chararts up. You can only have 3. You'll have to withdraw one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:26, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just withdrew Adderfang. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:33, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see how this could've been tweaked if you redid the stripes and they don't even looks similar to the old image. Blur the "highlight" on the haunch. 01:37 Wed Dec 14

Here is what i did: I earsed the highlights and shading, then color picked the stripes, erased the stripes, and then re-drew the stripes and re-did the shading and higlights, and blurred everything. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:57, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

NOTE This was a TWEAK, this is NOT re-done, got it, if i see ONE more coment on how it looks re-done, you'll be ingored, got it? I'm SICK of peole saying i re-did it. I didn't I TWEAKED IT. End of story. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Maple, calm down. It doesn't matter if you tweaked it or redid it, as it needed to be redone anyway. Round out and blur the "highlight" on the haunch. 02:23 Wed Dec 14

Also fix the blurred lineart. 02:44 Wed Dec 14

What blurred lineart? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, just for future reference, that's kind of redoing and just color picking from the old image. Not that it matters in this case, like Wildy said, but technically, this is redone... Anyways, I see blurred lineart on the back and possibly the muzzle. Don't know if Wildy's talking about anywhere else. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:09, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (W) - Withdrawn
Took the tufts from the deputy, so I'm not changing them. I also darkened the shading, and made the scar on the ear match the dep. image. OA was Bramble, then tweaked by Goldenpaw. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:02, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I wanna do Diesel, so I'm withdrawing this. I'll repost after he's approved. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:53, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (W) - Redone
Shading needed to be redone. Took all the colors from his warrior charart. OA was Moonflight. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:24, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste (by his paws) 01:35 Wed Dec 14

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:38, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight (if it is.) If it isn't, blur the shading near the chest :3 01:48, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:28, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Diesel (KP) - Redone
Redone as gray. OA was Bramble. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

It was redone, Pale, not for approval xD Blur the smudges a tad. 02:07, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make his stripes black, and make the white parts less blueish. 02:58, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whoops, my bad, I was in a bit of a rush. XD And I made the stripes black, but if I make my shading less blue then the white looks really gray. This is the only way I ever make white go well on other colors on my chararts. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:26, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt. D) - Redone
OA was Frostheart. Redone for all the reasons the leader version had (and, basically, to match the alt leader). Comments? 02:10 Wed Dec 14

Give him a torn ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:25, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Fuzzypelt (W) - Redone
Blegh, lineart editing failure. I couldn't possibly match Paleclaw's skill... Anyway, OA was Bramble, and he needed to match his elder. 03:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Opposite way around Oblivion, I can't match your skills. XD Anyways, thin the lineart on the fluffy bits juuuust a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:17, December 14, 2011 (UTC)