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Clawface (W) ~ Tweaked


Orginal artist was Snadstar12. Well, here he is....all I did was add some scars....I tred to make them match is rouge image. Idk if i did or not...but...comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:26, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Please fix the eye? 14:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar near the haunch looks too light at the bottom. 21:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

That is because i can't blur that part without blurring the lineart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just fix it afterwards or read a tutorial 22:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll move the scar over a bit...then I'll upload. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Moved the scar over, blurred the shading, and fixed the eye. What else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I've uploaded over to see if i could ger the changes to show. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-do the shading. 00:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks fine to me, just needs to be blured a bit. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  04:46, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did the shading and the highlights(Well, I brightened them a tad.) And blurred it to the max. Changes should be in the history. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:49, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make it look like the rogue image? ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, could you make the ends of the scars a bit pointier? With rounded ends, they kind of look like brush strokes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:54, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, I'll do it late, 'cause, Gimp isn't opening Clawface for some reason, nor is Pixril, so I'll see if I can work on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Gimp is working now, I'll get right on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-changes aren't showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy; fix that, and blur the shading more. 22:36, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Omg, the changes ARE showing! What are the odds? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark and blotchy. You'll have to redo it unless you find another way to make it work. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar on the tail wouldn't go like that, it can only be where there is flesh. If his rouge is like that, the scar needs to be tweaked. 02:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

So the tail isn't flesh?.....it is just fur mussle and bone? I'm confused..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

You know how the tail bone goes down the mmiddle? There can't be a scar extending across the whole thing because apart from down the middle, the rest is fur. Sky, it's over 9000!! 03:21, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, his rogue charart's tail scar is right next to the middle, so it's a bad choice for a scar location, but it's ok. However, this one is scooted up some. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:24, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are blotchy, blur them. 21:56, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so do I remove the tail scar? Or what? 'Cause, I'm confused.

Sorry, that was me. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:06, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think you should redo the tail, and put the scar a little lower. 22:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (Q)~ Redone
Original artist was Sandstar12 and it needed to be long haired. I could not do a good tabby pattern to save my life, and i might just end up redoing the stripes. Comments? 20:26, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Add some of those small stripes in between the big ones on her hind foot. It looks out of place with the big gaps. And nonsense, I think you can do tabby markings just fine! 20:37, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy. Iceheart, you make excellent tabby patters! xP Curl the ends of the stripes by the eyes up to resemble eyelashes, they make her look kinda strict. xP Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 21:23, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Lol angry Silverstream >:|. 03:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Darken the nose color some so it doesn't blend with the pelt. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Round the tips of the M stripe on her forehead and blur the stripes on her belly and the Y stripe on her shoulder. This is beautiful, Iceheart! ;) Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 22:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:22, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and lighten the highlight on the chest. 22:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Theres not suppsed to be a highlight on the chest. 22:16, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

What's up with the ear (the one WITH the pink)? It seems lighter for some reason. =/ 01:53, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 23:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, so sorry to be commenting when it's about to be approved, but can you define the earpink a bit more? 22:12, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ottersplash (W) - Redone
Original artist was Darkhallows, and she needed to be redone to match her description. 21:08, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, beautiful, Rainey! Blur the shading on his chest a bit more and maybe lighten it a tad. Scarlet wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:26, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make it a bit more ginger, it almost looks cream. 03:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous, Rainy. Can you make the line in the nicked ear just a bit thicker though? 07:08, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 01:31, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the head. 22:42, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 22:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Define and lighten the earpink, since its hard to see. 22:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 20:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the nick in the ear a little bigger? Either that, or make the lineart a tad bit thicker. 00:24, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the tip of the earpink a bit. 22:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (W) ~ Redone
Took all the colors from her warrior and apprentice chararts. Redone as a long-hair. Original artist was Bramble and was later tweaked by Goldenpaw and Stealthfire. Comments? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

It won't show me the image, but if I'm seing it right from the thumbnail, darken the tail shading some 21:22, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:31, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the back. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Shadewing/Sig}} 21:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Great job! Add some more stripes. 21:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 01:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the round stripes smaller and add more wiggly stripes? Too many big round stripes look unrealistic. 13:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Re-worked some of the stripes. You all know where to find the changes. xP <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 21:58, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the patches, lighten the highlight on the haunch and tail, and blur the head shading. 22:43, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Misty, the patches do have shading, except that there's a layer for shading on the patches themselves and a layer for the shading on the stripes. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. :D Lighten the haunch highlight a bit more. Ginger-and-white cat shading is hard, I know. xD 00:25, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Her ginger patches seem a little bright for a cat, but that could just be me. There also looks to be a little bit of waste. 00:35, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivy, personally, I think she looks fine and I took all the colors from her warrior and apprentice charart. 02:44, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

The colors look good to me, but I think you should blur and darken the tail shading. Other than that, looks good. :) 22:05, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:31, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could add another nick in her ear like the one I have up? Unless you think it'd be too far down to see, but it's just a suggestion. 21:56, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) ~ Redone
Original artist was Darkhallows, I didn't know if you wanted me to copy the way he/shhe did it or not. I just copied the idea from the Elder image, so comments? Moo  nstr   ike  22:35, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this 'Loudbelly.warrior.png' Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:45, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:02, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried to change the name but my image won't appear, Darkhallows will when I try to post it. I blurred the highlights, not to much but tell me if you want more. Moo  nstr   ike  00:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is pretty Moon! -- Toshiro  Hyorinmaru cannot be two DeathGod's sword! 16:20, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and make the eye look more realistic and add a pupil. 22:44, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded That better? Moo  nstr   ike  01:56, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the highlights bigger? 00:12, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, this has already gone through 24 hours without comments. xD 00:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (L) - Redone
I just redid it so he could match his other images. I actually really like this one. Took all the colors from the warrior image - original artist was Mumble789. Comments? 23:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are in history. 23:56, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

The nose color looks odd. Brown against brown. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

So we will be adding black muzzles to all of his images, right? Nice work, by the way. 00:01, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and thanks. Mintstar, well, I couldn't do pink...and neither could I do gray, so I went with brown. Unless you'd prefer green? :) 00:05, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Why couldn't you do gray? :D <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a scar on his muzzle 01:21, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

And a torn ear. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky, <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">it's over 9000!! 01:23, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, he also needs scars in his pelt too. And pale amber eyes (if I remember right, yours are just amber) This is coming along nice, btw 01:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Stretch/Smudge the black a bit further up his face and on either side too. Can you add a couple more stripes? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 03:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, the scars! Stupid me *facepalm* Mint, it looked really...odd against the brown coloring. The brown looks better. 13:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

YOU DID THIS? Woo~ Looks so freaking cool! Blur the black on the muzzle, please.

Could you make the leg shading have a lighter part, and blur the stripes just a bit? This is GREAT! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:29, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks so much guys :) There's a strip of brown near the ear - I've tried so hard to get it out, but it's stubborn. Tips or help, guys? 00:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken the stripes just a tad? They look a bit unnatural. Otherwise, great work! :) 00:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Break up the scars on his legs, it wouldn't be in a perfect line like that. 18:41, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add a scar across the bridge of his nose? --  Fr  os  t  e  d  A  p  p  l  e   22:21, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the ear. 22:46, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. I have to squint to see the muzzle. 23:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 23:28, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The scars look unnatural. Make them the same color as the scar from his old charart and less round on the ends. The one running up his tail looks especially odd, in my opinion. No offense. ^^; And I think you need to blur the muzzle a bit more and define the color of his nose so it doesn't blend in as much. 00:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, in my opinion, the scars are fine. I've seen lots of cats roaming around my town with wobbly scars that look more like stripes than scars. 20:35, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Scars are fine, Shelly. I've seen quite a few cats with scars that don't look natural. That's what makes each cat unique. 23:33, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

But, smudge the stripes in the direction of the fur a bit :3 01:40, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the torn ear go a little deeper, since it's said that it was in a "deep V shape" 17:38, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Splashpelt: On the warrior image, the srtipes aren't smudged. I copied everything from the warrior image. 19:54, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are the scars above or below the shading? I can't quite tell. If they're above the shading, do you think you could put them below? Sorry, it's a bit of a pet peeve of mine when scars don't really look like they have much shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry Paleclaw, but I can't, I lost all the layers to it. 19:42, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. W) - Redone
This one has been bothering me for awhile. I was the original artist, and it was too ginger. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:58, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Change is in the history. I don't know how I added the one showing. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:01, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Darken the earpink a tad. :3 03:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I forgot to add that I borrowed everything but the eye color from Birchfall's alt. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 15:20, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much better, Mintstarr. Blur the ear pink a tad though. 21:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:14, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight bigger, and darken the shading. 22:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- there are no highlights. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, then. 21:54, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="saffron" style="background:crimson">☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:48, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudstar (L) - Tweaked
Alright, here's Cloudstar. He needed darker shading, and I changed the earpink beacuse it was purply. Original artist was Sandy. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  15:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 15:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading needs to be blurred, and the haunch shading is blotchy, so fix that. 22:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewater (E) - Tweaked
Original artist was Icethroat, and I just darkened the shading. Changes are below the current version as usual. 20:11, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really dark. Lighten it up a lot. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:12, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. 22:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail and define the earpink. 22:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the shading a bit, and brighten the earpink. Looking great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:19, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

To me, the shading still seems a tad dark and makes her look like a gray cat. Just lower the eraser's opacity and that should work :) Assuming you have layers. 04:29, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think the shading's light enough now. And I don't use layers, I just use them sometimes while creating a charart (usually a practice charart), but when I've finished the colouring, I just merge them all. I don't rely on layers too much anyways. 17:24, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

And redden it. 22:09, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (Q) ~ Redone


She needed to be longhaired. Original artist was Icethroat21. The changes aren't shoiwng yet. And she looked more white than pale gray, so I'll either tweak it a bit later or just re-do it. :P 11:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cross that. I redid it again. :P Here's the link: Dawnflower -- 11:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad 18:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Looks awesome, Rainey! 22:50, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

You can see the little layers of the highlights, blur them together some :3 01:38, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I blurred as much as I could on pixlr. Comments? 10:59, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (Alt. H) - Redone
I wasn't sure if I was allowed to do this, but I found this image the other day (it wasn't on his page, even though it was approved), and I realized it needed some tweaking. It needed the mud removed and patchy fur. If this should be put up, I'm fine with it being declined, but I figured I'd try. Originally by Kittypet1. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Lighten the tail, and smudge the fur into the earpink of the left ear. ` 23:39, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

i thought he was dark brown. 23:47, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops, forgot to put that this was his Alt in the heading. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a white muzzle ;P Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hm. Is it me, or does it have a brownish tint to it..? -- 23:54, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I didn't add the white muzzle originally cause I wasn't sure if it was just a plain white muzzle, or one graying from age. If it was just plain, I don't think it would have been added to the alt. But anyways, I added it. And yes Blue, it did have a brownish tint to it. It was the shading, I don't normall just use black anymore fo the shading, it usually has a bit of color, and I think I over saturated this one's shading. XD I fixed it though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:02, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful Paleclaw! Darken the shading on the haunch, under the chin, and on the herbs. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:15, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The patchy fur on the shoulder looks a bit gray; pinken it a bit. 00:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the shading in said places, and Misty, that's just the shading. If I pinken it, it will start to look a bit more flat on the patches, and that's always a bit of a pet peeve of mine. So for now, I'm gonna keep it like that, but if someone else commetns on it too, I guess I can change it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:25, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The lower patchy fur on the tail looks a bit awkward. Can you do something with that? You don't have to though, because it looks really neat the way it is. 02:48, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Cloudy, I took the lineart from his normal image, so I'm not gonna mess with that at all. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

That's fine. Can you darken the shading a tiny bit then? 04:29, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done! ^^ Changes aren't showing though. .-. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:20, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if its this computer or the shading, but the left ear looks lighter than the right ear; darken it a bit. 22:08, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Misty, I think it's you. The shading looks just fine on my laptop. 22:11, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

It does? Oops. I hate this computer; it makes everything look strange. 22:14, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Emberfoot ~ Redone
Enjoy. Original artist was Hollyberry, and he needed to have short hair. 00:35, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

It says he has darker gray paws, not black. Tone them down to a dark gray. 00:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lengthen the ear pink. -- 00:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, those are dark gray. They stay how they are. Plus, I took all colors straight from the other image. 00:39, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading. 00:40, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

/dies. Four edit conflicts? Really? -.- I agree with Ivy, they should be lightened. Even if you did take the colors from the original image, your shading makes them darker, so now they look black. Anyways, blur the paws a bit and make the earpink more centered. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:43, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy. 00:48, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 01:05, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If the changes don't show, it's not my fault. XD 01:09, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I believe this is done...? :D Don't wory, I'm not trying to be pushy, this is just a reminder that no one else is allowed to comment any more. xD 22:08, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (Q) - Redone
She needed to be long-haired, as well as needing stripes on her ginger patches. Original artist is Bramble, and I believe tweaked by Goldenpaw. I found a much easier method to do the shading, I hope it shows! I also wanted to make her scar a little more dramatic than it previously was by adding deeper claw marks in her scar. Comments? 18:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and b.ur the chest shading. 21:54, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my gosh, this is gorgeus, Blur the earpink just a bit more. 22:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! I personally think it's one of my better works. 00:40, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is very nice! Can you tear her left ear a bit more, maybe add one more scar across the muzzle, lighten the shading on the gray a tad, and define the stripes on the spot on her chest under her chin. 03:22, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and I don't believe the changes are showing. The correct one is where I have added another nick in her ear. 16:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! On the ear with the earpink, can you define the earpink a bit? 22:05, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Daisy (Q) ~ Redone
My first queen! The shading was blotchy and undefined, and the earpink was too light, so I redid it. Comments? I've blurred the shading as much as possible... 00:10, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Original artist was Ashshadow. 00:11, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. Get rid of the light spot on her ankle, it seems misplaced to me. 00:12, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I accidently added a light spot while doing the tail shading. Re-Uploaded. 00:01, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mossypaw (A) ~ Redone
My first apprentice! Anyway, she needed to be longhaired, and the original artist was Icethroat21. 02:45, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink thicker around the bottom. Very pretty! 02:55, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading so the white looks white. 02:57, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Ivystripe! 03:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the highlight on the haunch. 19:59, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and blur teh earpink, and add a highlight to the tail. 22:03, September 9, 2011 (UTC)