Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Merry (L) - Redone
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink -- 20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? ''' Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink triangular -- 01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define/darken the shading a little. -- 04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define the earpink. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of like the stripes on the white, even if it isn't conventional. There's some blurred lineart on the ear. Define and brighten the earpink.  ❀ wild  heart ❀ 04:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Man HOW do you do that? awesome! But darken the shading. 04:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks :). Comments? Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  17:46, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wow this is awesome work I love it! Yes, I can't see ear pink, can you define it? Leaf-storm,17:49,September 25,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Thanks Leaf ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  18:07, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, I looked on the charart cearfully and I think there can be some more ear pink colour on the white tip of ear. Only a little. It's looking like she have ear only on orange part. Leaf-storm,17:31,September 26,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular too. 23:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 03:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah It's awesome (want help) Leaf-storm,14:18,October 1,2011 (UTC)

Yes, I can't figure out what you mean Leafstorm D:. Itt's just me and my stupidity acting up again xD Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  00:47, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink, make it brighter and more triangular. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * forget it* right? :-) Leaf-storm,9:10,October 2,2011 (UTC)

Shadow (L) - Tweaked
er Comments? 06:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the OA, and what needed to be tweaked? 06:36, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well aren't I smart? :P Shading needs major blurring. Original artist- MosspathOfSkyClan. 06:38, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the tail highlight a bit & blur it -- 06:40, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten up said shading a bit? Pretty please? 06:41, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes a tad and blur the haunch highlight. Looks good :3 06:42 Sep 25 Sun

Cutee! Lighten the entire image. 14:59, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. xD 16:19, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

There are some miscolored pixils inside of her left ear, it'd be our right. 16:31, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:38, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose color. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I thought the nose was supposed to be a darker version of the pelt color. There'a a bit of gray area around her back, so, you may want to get rid of that. =P 22:34, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I thought so too. Anyways, I think I got the gray. :P 03:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the nose a bit darker? It still seems the same color as the pelt. 00:47, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, you mean lighter? Also, tone down the chest highlight a little bit. 14:16, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to be a darker color then the pelt. 17:13, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:31, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt colour into the ear a tad so it looks like there's fur sticking up. Looks really good :3 05:48 Sun Oct 2

'Reuploaded. Thanks! 15:19, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (W) ~ Redone


Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?

Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now lighten it and add more shading all around. 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch -- 01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Sorry this took so long, I lost his shading layer, so i had to re-make his shading layer, and then, i rushed it, and got this....^^; Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and blur the highlights. 14:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Wow....that was fast ;D Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred more. 15:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-it has now been blurred to a max. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Birdflight (W) - Redone
I love this, though I loved her old stripes, too. Original artist was Goldenpaw, and the stripes were drawn on unrealistically. 20:00, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The tail stripes need to match, it looks like it was taken from a completly different cat 20:03, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:11, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

<3 20:12, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the tail shading towards the top a bit, because it looks a little flat if anyone knows what I mean. 20:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's a little dark now... 20:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like the way you did the tail. If you think it's too dark, you can lighten it, but it's your choice. 20:49, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened it anyways. 21:06, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple, and more pink/red. 22:35, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It looked fine to me. 23:37, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's a bit oif blurred lineart at the tip of the ear closest to us, but it might just be a bit of the stripes' colour tipping the ear. I dunno. Because it's copyrighted, I couldn't "steal" it onto my desktop and zoom into the ear to check it out in Photoshop.- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 08:27, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's just the stripe colour. I always do that to my tabbies. 17:42, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Kk, Moonleaf. :)- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 03:20, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. Other than that, I see nothing wrong. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:22, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't blur it without blurring the stripes (I don't use layers :P), so I just redid the tail shading. 00:48, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it and re-make stripes. I'm doing this too, try it. Leaf-storm,14:35,October 2,2011 (UTC)

So, should I redo all of the stripes, or just a part of it? And where do I blur? 15:57, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Pouncetail (E) - Redone
OA was Flamingomom3, and it needed to be longhaired and needed stripes. Comments? 22:34, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, I like this ^o^ Redden the earpink a smidge and blur the shading along the tail. 22:42, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:46, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:15, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the stripes. 23:19, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:21, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ooooooh pretty. *.* The earpink seems the be kind of a funny shape though, could you make it the shape it's supposed to be for elders? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I copied the earpink shape from Poppydawn, so I don't think it looks strange...

Nevermind; I didn't really like the shading so I redid it. 23:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much better than the old one. Love it! CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTS Maybe make the earpink a bit larger, though I'm not sure. There's a bit of blurred lineart on the back-of-neck-attached-to-back sorta place, just above the higher part of ginger fur that was broken in the middle sort of place to let in the white. If that made any sense :P And about half of the lineart tuft of fur in the middle of nowhere on the chest is too light, turned gray by the white around it. I hope I'm making sense. If you don't know what I mean, I'll circle it all in an extra image.- Kittycat79 aka Rowantail 08:20, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading on the white a smidge? This is wonderful. 21:17, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:36, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the hue of ginger and the eye color - I thought it was a girl at first. So make it like...non girly. x3 01:47, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading. And, darken/define the shading on the chest. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:20, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (A) - Redone
Comments? It needed to be longhaired. 23:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Icethroat21. 23:45, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Darken the shading a bit and brighten the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:50, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Sky- Killer of Daleks 05:41, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hollowpaw (A) ~ Redone
Redone as longhair, and since it was decided to give him a pale underbelly rather then a white one. OA was Flamingomom3, I believe. Comments? 00:22, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the stripes and smudge the haunch stripes, and define the ear pink. Y U NO EMAL 2 TO ME??? >:| 00:23, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; it blends in with the pelt too much. Darken the shading, and blur and smudge the part where the pale chest meets the fur. 00:24, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you :3 Icestorm- I did email it to you ._. Changes are in the usual spot. 20:16, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, you didn't >:| Only until you saw the comment did you email it to me. x333 Blur the tail stripes. 20:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yeah, I did. Lol. 20:49, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The eye seems to blend in with the pelt, but that could just be me. 21:18, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? The color or the eye itself? The eye color stands out fine to me. 00:11, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, it's not just you Ivy, I agree. I can barely see them through the pelt. Brighten them a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. 01:55, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes more, please. 01:58, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Now blur the shading. 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (L)~ Redone
I tried a new method of shading... Anyway, she needed her shading re-done, and the OA was Dawnfeather. Comments? :3 01:10, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is tweaked, not re-done, right? Looks good. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:11, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the little dot of darker shading where the haunch meets the forearm. Love the color. ^_^ 01:11, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I actually re-did the whole image. 01:31, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I love this image! Brighten the earpink on this > side. 01:45, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gracias. :3 02:18, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

The midrift? shading is darker than the rest. Lighten it please. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:10, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

If you pay attention to angles on a real cat, yes, the shading would be darker, as the light source is farther away and blocked out more. 02:40, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

xD There's a bit of waste in the bottem right corner (when looking at it). Just ask if I'm not being specific enough, I hate looking for waste. Lolz. 18:28, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think i found it. xD 18:49, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (L)~ Tweaked
Woo, I'm a warrior now, so... I just made his tail longer... it's his namesake you know. I was surprised we hadn't already done it. Original artist was Yai-Girl. Comments? 03:07, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. ^^; Forgot the image limit here was smaller. I'll revert the image myself. 03:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) I think this will be declined, since this is over the limit of 15 images.
 * 2) The tail lineart is too thick, make it thinner.
 * 3) Shorten the tail a bit, I don't think a cat would have a tail that long. 03:10, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you need to credit me for my tweak, as I actually had to redo many parts of it. 03:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine now, Shelly. You can continue the tweak. Just keep this in mind for next time, 'kay? 03:17, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

wait...I though if we were gonna tweak it we were gonna use Vinestar's lineart? - 03:36, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I decided that such a small tweak wasn't worth a complete redo. I can handle the tail. I'll shorten it in a second. 03:48, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made his tail about the same length as Vinestar's and thinned out the lineart. Good? 03:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail tip look more natural. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:09, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

In what way does it look unnatural? 22:29, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks natural. 00:18, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 14:06, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:14, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The heck? Now it doesnt even different anymore, the tail looked fine before :\ - 18:25, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ah jeez, wrong file. Sorry. Stupid computer. =_= Re-uploaded. 19:06, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

ooohhhh Now I see it! nevermind, I see nothing wrong 8D - 19:27, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (D) ~ Redone
Wow... I have been wanting to redo this charart for ages. OA was me. The stripes looked all red and weird and the shading was blotchy, so I just decided to re-do it. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:42, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blurr it - 01:43, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing.... - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:49, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it more. 01:58, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:22, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the muzzle and forehead and darken the shading on the ears. Looks good :3 04:12 Sun Oct 2

Define ear-pink Leaf-storm,10:36,October 2,2011 (UTC)

Make it more of a ginger color. This is a light ginger, perhaps of the highlights? Darken the highlights or lighten the shading. 14:05, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Feathertail (W) - Tweaked
- Darkened shading and re-did the stripes so it should match Silverstream, and Y wasn't realistic. She has been mentioned as looking like her mother several times, so, yeah. Comments? 14:15, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Add some lighter stripes Leaf-storm,14:33,October 2,2011 (UTC)

It's not needed. 15:58, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we had a deal cab out crooked star? -- 17:54, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yesh :) I'm going to put his warrior image up after I get this one approved. 17:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

That wasnt the deal. The deal was all of your next ones were going to be crookedstsr. You didn't do that twice. I undid your edit on crooked star because I still think it was to much. If you want to "tweak" his images, just remove the cream. -- 17:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

No, it wasn't. The deal was I would do alkl of his images. And it was approved. Two days ago, in fact. If you had a problem, that's too bad. It was approved, and that's the end of the story. 18:05, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It wasnt approved properly. I wasnt even up for a minute before splashpelt archived it. You arent supposed to do that with redone images. And yes i stand by that it was redone because you never did tell me what you kept the same, just listed off all the things you changed (Everything). I told you i was going to decline it, but then real life stepped up and i couldnt get on the wiki, and you continued to work on it. A bit slimmy if you ask me. I'm standing by my discision. And yes i did say next. So you broke the deal. 18:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure why we're arguing here, but oh well. It was approved. Yes, it was approved properly. Just because you weren't up doesn't mean a SW can't approve something. And really? What were we supposed to do? You never had a problem with that until Splashpelt archived my image. Yes, I continued to work on it because I had comments. You said you MIGHT decline it. And no, you didn't. I did not break the deal. Thanks for asking., 18:28, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

My goodness, is this my fault now? Are we still arguing over that image that has been approved for days? In my opinion, Icestorm couldn't of just tweaked it without ruining shading or anything. It had to be redone. C'mon, it's an image. I archived it for no further arguements, and it was fine by then. We should just pick ourselves off the ground, and move on from just one image. Yeah, it's PCA. Arguements happen. Can't we get over it? Define the earpink. 18:36, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Um...If i may, after Thornclaw is approved, and I do Crookedstar's Warrior image? It is stupid, she didn't redo Crookedstar, just defined the stripes(And made them more real looking.), got rid of the cream, and that was it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:40, October 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Let's end this argument now. Iceheart, if you have a problem with the approval of Icestorm's image, bring that complaint to the project deputy. If the Deputy feels the approval of the image is valid, it is. This is OVER unless someone wants to file a formal complaint with the Project Deputy to have the validity of the approval double checked. If I see other posts in this, from anybody else, and it's not a formal review, I will be greatly displeased. 18:43, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

This much of a problem over an image? Didn't we learn from Crookedstar? Also, Icey, please lighten up the shading a bit. I love Feathertail. =) 18:46, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not even bothering with these arguments anymore. I think this would look a bit more natural if you blurred some of the stripes (like how Iceheart did with Silverstream). 19:11, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

What stripes? 20:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Up to you. I'd just do all of them, personally, then maybe define some by redrawing some stripes on top. It adds depth, in my opinion. 22:07, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC)~ Tweaked
The patches needed to be smudged more like the other images. I also made the ear pink bigger, and changed the nose back to black. 01:50, October 3, 2011 (UTC)