Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=For Approval= Take it to the approval page

=Tweaking=

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded Ikilledit 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't really match. Also lighten it so you can see the lineart, and add/majorly define the shading. 05:38, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink on the right. (Our right) 01:33 Sun Jul 15

Still working on this? o3o 02:53, 16, 07, 2012

Yes, re-uploaded. o3o 09:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't match. Take the eye and earpink color from her other images, add more mottles, and make them smaller. 00:44, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a leedle bit. 02:34, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks brown with black mottles...make her more black. Skt Omnia vincit amor  02:36, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading a bit more. Unless changes aren't showing. 01:21, 12, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 20:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case the changes aren't showing here he is. 20:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

These stripes don't match the other images in the slightest. I know it's a kit blank and it's harder, but not even the stripe style matches. Would you consider redoing them? 20:59, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the base coat should be much lighter. Breeze whisker  04:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the fur, but I didn't redo the stripes because I think they are pretty similar if another person disagrees then I will try to redo them, but I don't have GIMP and I can't find the xcf file so I would have to redo the entire thing. Sorry, I really don't want to sound rude or anything. 21:23, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, look at this image. It's nowhere close to matching the others. If you don't redo this, someone else will. 02:25, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gotta agree Wild. They really don't look like the others. Breeze whisker  00:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving you my permission to redo this if need be. It needs to match. 04:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I probably need to thicken the stripes. And fix the earpink. 23:01, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes, smudge them a lot more, darken and define the shading. 00:33, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Change the pattern to match the warrior... 00:48, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the shading have a slight reddish/pinkish tint so it looks like the other images? 11:57, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, shading needed defined. I'm thinking the stripes might need to have their opacity lowered a tad to match the loner, but that's for you guys to decide 21:47, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think if you blurred the stripes a little, they'd match just fine. Breeze whisker  00:48, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if changes aren't showing, but I still can't see the shading at all. Could you define it more? 21:36, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ehh I think this is too dark, but if it matches, it matches. I also defined the pale belly since apparently it wasn't light enough D: 04:31, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad more. (And maybe a few more flecks? It's your choice, though.) 17:02, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink a tad? 16:45, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:34, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's a stripe of lighter fur, almost looks like a lighter chest. Since that's not there on his other images, could you get rid of that? 07:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

It was always there, and look on his loner. 15:33, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Oh I see. My bad. That means the rogue needs to be tweaked... o.o Hmm. 00:28, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Q) ~ Withdrawn
Just darkened it to match the other images. Latest change was made by Misty. Comments? ^^ 00:07, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Misty already did this tweak. It doesn't need to be done again... 01:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Misty's tweak was declined due to the one week limit, but it was never reverted. Cinder, blur the stomach shading, please.

Oh, Ok. I just thought it was approved since it was never reverted. :P Darken the highlights a tad. 04:26, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleclaw what do you mean by darken it? XP Sorry I'm not very good with vocabulary. 19:13, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I believe Paleh means to dull the highlights and blend them in with the pelt more. 01:25, 12, 07, 2012

Re-Uploaded 00:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

If it doesn't make the white look grey, could you darken the shading a little? Breeze whisker  04:20, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blend/dull the highlights a bit more. 02:37, 15, 07, 2012

Sorry guys I'm withdrawing. I have to get ready for my grandparents. You can decline or someone else may take over. 21:50, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Alt.Ki) ~ Tweaked
The shading needed to be darkened. Most recent OA was me. Comments? 14:05, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more, but it might mean that you have to lighten the base color. 07:40, 14, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 23:21, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

You also might want to thicken ---> side of the shading more <--- that way. (Just a personal preference, not 100% necessary) 02:52, 15, 07, 2012

I'd rather not, but if someone else thinks so I'll do that. 14:49, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:34, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:27, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Tweaked
needed shading darkened. original artist was Shelly. Comments? 14:25, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I know this isn't why they needed tweaking, but could you define the earpink a tad? 20:41, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:15, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste by the tail, chest and midriff. 02:59, 15, 07, 2012

And by the tail. 06:58, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:48, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) - Tweaked
same as warrior. changes aren't showing. Comments? 14:26, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

could you define the earpink? 20:42, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:24, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste along ---> taht side of her tail. 23:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:49, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Graymist (W) - Redone
Her stripes were unrealistic, shading was blotchy, etc. I didn't have Sumopaint to work with, so this is a pixlr image....and, actually...not half bad. I was the most recent OA. 00:30, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot to remove that last white pixel on the chest, and blur the earpink a bit more. Pretty<3 00:33, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

This is wonderful, but can you add a few more stripes on the tail? 00:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. Especially behind her shoulder. Very pretty. ^^ Breeze  whisker  04:17, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad larger. 16:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I was originally gonna trash this version and redo everything in Sumo...but I think I can continue to work in Pixlr... 14:39, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste near her tail, and blur the earpink a tad more. 15:41, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just a preference but perhaps smooth out the stripes (as in make them less... bumpy? o3o) 03:15, 16, 07, 2012

I think the stripes are fine. But could you define the tail shading and reverse the depth in the eye? 00:39, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Mintfur (SC) (Alt Ki) ~ Tweaked
Just blurred the shading a tad. OA of the most recent was Skye. Comments? 05:21, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit and define it. Oh, and I wasn't an OA. I just changed the lineart, since part of the cite was false.

Vlur the sahding on her front legs. 16:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lol vlur Define the shading a bit. 22:34, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lol sahding Make the shading closer to the lineart. 22:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also add more shading. 03:06, 15, 07, 2012

Lighten the shading 23:56 Sun Jul 15

Re-uploaded Thank god for the dodge tool~ 09:39, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? :3  16:57, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Just a question. Why isn't this image on her page? 21:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Good question... it's not in her trivia either. If a cite can't be found within a few days, this will have to be declined. 22:15, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ Tweaked
This guy xD I changed the shading placement. OA was R-face. Comments? 05:53 Sat Jul 14

Define the shading. 16:46, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:46 Sun Jul 15

Can you denter the earpink and define the earpink on his right ear? 16:44, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:25 Tue Jul 17

Swoop (KM) - Redone
OA was the Super, incredible, epical Paleh, stripes and mud were inconsistant and the shading needed to be darkened. Took all the colors from the CG. 12:11, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shaing on her haunch and back, and define the stripes in the shaded areas. 16:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:38, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Iceheart wasn't the OA. 0.o It was Nightfall and me. Add more mud. 00:10, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ....oops...  00:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste under her front paw closest to us. 00:32, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:11, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly make the mud more gray, just to match. And this could just be me but the stripes look more like fur texture, so make them more... stripey. owo <span style="">03:18, 15, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded The mud is the same color as the CG, I just ran the burn tool over it so it looks more textured. 03:41, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur that mud patch right behind her foreleg a little bit? Breeze whisker  23:57, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad? 16:43, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 17:26, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Also, darken the shading. 00:35, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudtail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Icy, with a redo by me. I redid the shading (woo for still having the file).

Lighten the shading and blur it.. 21:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. (Only the one on our right) <span style="">01:39 Sun Jul 15

I personally think the earpink's fine. <span style="">03:36, 15, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded.

Blur the shading on his chest a little more. 17:23, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, actually. But, if someone else asks, I'll do it.

I think it could be blurred a bit. c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  14:00, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Mistystar (Q) - Redone
Shading made no sense. Last OA was Shelly. Took the shading from Willowpelt and the colors from her apprentice. Comments? 00:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it/define it on her tail just a tad bit? 02:47, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same as the shading on Willowpelt, so I'd rather not.... but how do you blur and define shading? 0.o 06:00, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it then make it darker. 17:19, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Smallstar (Ki) - Tweaked
Shading on black and white cats... eh. And I'm still not a fan of those smudging... Anyways shading needed defining. OA's were Dawnfeather and myself. Comments? <span style="">03:41, 15, 07, 2012

Can you make the earpink more triangular? 15:50, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading a tad more. 17:31, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. <span style="">03:49, 16, 07, 2012

Lighten the black. 17:18, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mudfur (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Cloudy, and needed mottles. And I promise, I did not redo this. I just added mottles then defined the shading a tad since the mottles made the shading look a tad light. And this time I'll work on the image more omments? 04:16, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

The mottles look a tad dark 05:35, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 06:21, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the midriff shading. 17:22, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit on the tail. Breeze whisker  23:55, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that shoulder shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:56, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Though I think the midriff shading's fine. 06:43, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA is Rowan, and the color needed to be tweaked, and the shading needed to be defined. I also defined the earpink. Comments?

Enlarge the earpink in the right ear, and who are you exactly? 12:51, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. 17:30, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Stoner, you derp. You forgot to sign. xD

Reuploaded. Woops. 06:46, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her back. 02:31, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I defined/darkened the shading on him. OA= Bramble, than redone by Rowan. Changes aren't showing yet. >.> Comments? <span style="">19:29 Sun Jul 15

Changes are now showing! :) <span style="">22:39 Sun Jul 15

Can you make the earpink color match the other image and make it more triangular? 02:54, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadedo.o The earpink is straight from the other image, but I made it more triangular ;). I can't fix the one on (our) left because it'll erase the pelt colour. <span style="">03:10 Mon Jul 16

I still can't see the shading very well. To me, he seems darker on his kit image than his apprentice. Not sure if that's just me being a derp though  04:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, do you want me to try and fix it or are you as onfused as I am now? :P <span style="">14:54 Mon Jul 16

Maybe you want to lighten his base coat a couple shades? 15:43, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do that when I get home. :) At the library! Woo! High-speed here :P  <span style="">15:52 Mon Jul 16

Blossomkit (Ki) - Tweaked
Ew, blotchy shading. Anyways, I just added a layer of shading over it. OA was Sandy, with a tweak by Ice and Leaf-storm. Comments? 19:58, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading right over her left leg. Looks good! Breeze whisker  23:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading over left leg. And thanks. :) 03:07, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her head and chest. 17:18, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Rockshade (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Yes, this is tweaked. Icy watched me do the entire thing. Jeez, that image was ( no offense DJ, please don't shoot me ) quite a mess. o.o I redid the shading.

Lighten the image a teensy bit. c: He's bootiful~ 21:16, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

I think how dark it is is fine. Maybe define the shading between the legs a little, though. Breeze whisker  23:53, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back a tad. 04:02, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you enlarge the earpink? 11:51, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'd rather not enlargen the ear pink. It's annoying and awkward enough to work with. ( To quote Goldenpaw, ear pink on kits is a pain )

Poppydawn (E) ~ Tweaked
Oh god I hate this image x.x I redid the stripes so she could match her other images better, comments? >.< 17:09, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, or lighten the shading in that area. 21:16, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorreltail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I defined the shading. OA was Shelly. Comments? 20:22 Mon Jul 16

Define the earpink and blur the tail shading? :3 01:28, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. 01:31, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think the darkness of the shading is fine o3o 01:36 Tue Jul 17

Blur the shading on her chest. 02:30, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

And could you blur her tail shading some, near the base? 02:31, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweaked
First color tweak, whoop. Needed the colors dulled and the shading needed to be defined. Most recent OA was Leaf-storm. 20:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. 02:30, July 18, 2012 (UTC)