Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 211

Harveymoon (KP) - Approved


01:12, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the tag a bit bigger Willowstep21 (talk) 13:31, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Tag size is artist's choice I believe, but it is up to Winter. 14:09, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, tag size is artist's choice and I only added it to match the manga version. I’d rather not change it.

17:44, February 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the collar shading some? Also think the collar coloration would be darker to match manga etc

the shading on the haunch and belly could be smoothed some, and possibly expanded a touch on the haunch too. 17:41, 02/23/2019

shading is missing a little bit on the tail right by the haunch, also can you lessen the amount on the tail? Whiskii ✿ 14:09, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome! Love it! -Texaswild

Remember to only comment if you see something on the image that needs to be fixed, Texas. While what you said is kind, it does not belong on the approval page and causes clutter. 18:25, February 25, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, Winter?

Note: Sorry if I'm mini-modding here, and if I am, ignore me, but Winter has a note on the vacay list, and she'll be back on the 28th. 02:32, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

I don't see a problem with harmless asking, Potato.

Reuploaded. Also I go by he/him. 06:48, February 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved! 01:33, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Honeytail (KP) - Approved
i tried 20:29, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

This is very good! ^^ I think there's a few uncolored pixels on the very tip of <--- ear and along ---> ear. 20:42, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the depth and smooth out the shading on the front leg/behind the front leg? 20:51, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

The lineart looks.. faded? 22:46, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:24, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth some more? 14:15, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:26, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved! 01:33, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Jay (Le) - Approved
hm. All colors from her other images. ​​

She has missing teeth, so can you make her frown to indicate that? 03:12, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

I left it alone because I have no idea how I'm supposed to tweak the lineart to do that. I will need a redline for that. ​

I don't know if it's even necessary...most toothless cats I met more had issues with keeping their tongue in than anything. 3:38 Wed Feb 27 2019

I think its fine tbh, I've seen plenty cats with missing teeth that didn't show on the outside unless the mouth was actually open. 05:19, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the front legs?

If possible, could you smooth the scars out on the leader and kp so that it looks more like a scar and not likr pink lined fur? 19:11, February 27, 2019 (UTC)

Mink, it's like that on the loner image as well as the KP I just posted below. It's fine and just how I do things. Plenty of my images bear this same style of "ragged"-ness. I'll reupload with the changes in a few minutes. ​

Re-uploaded. ​

CBA?

Approved! 01:33, March 2, 2019 (UTC)