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Graywing (WC) (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I've added to the table now. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and then define it everywhere. 08:36, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Also, the wiki is case-sensitive, the file should be named Graywing (WC).ancient.png, not Graywing_(WC).Ancient.png. 08:55, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have a ripped eartip? RaisuRice (talk) 14:12, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think so, because when he was in the tribe, he didn't have the ripped ear tip. Define the light on his forepaws. 14:31, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Try to give the shading more shape. You could use some shading on his shoulder, have it line the inner edge of his tail instead of just being in the tip, more shading higher up on the neck, and shading along his cheek. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:09, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I've redone the shading and renamed the file. I have already checked when Graywing got the ripped ear tip and it was in The First Battle I believe so he had no ripped ear tip as an ancient tribe member. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I know this sounds weird but define the tongue shading lmao. 21:45, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload this is a really new template XD --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:57, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. ikr xD 20:07, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I thought I'd change the eye as well. How he looked directly towards us looks a bit creepy, and his not a creepy cat. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:51, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading should be extended and up towards the back. It would kinda look like a "C", I think.

Reupload Like that? --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

The left front paw and chest seem very dark. Maybe lighten it up a bit? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 17:38, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the leg underneath the paw? 6:17 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and try to give a little more of a curve to the shading. Look at some of the other images for examples of what I mean. It doesn't really go with the body as well as I think it could. The body shading kinda seems like a straight line.. or something along those lines. I can't phrase things correctly, my apologies. x.x

Reupload I've added a bit more shading at the tip of his tail and base of his tail. I've done a highlight around the tail facing away from the body and I've blurred the overall shading a bit. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:53, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 16:37 Thu Oct 23

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe make the tongue more pink? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 13:35, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:38, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws, and it appears the body shading is leaking away from the lineart. This is looking very nice! 15:57, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

The paws are just shading and I don't know how to deal with shading leaking away from the lineart. and Thankyou! --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:25, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Add more shading near the lineart and only blur part of it (the part that's away from the lineart) 3:33 AM, Sun Oct 26, 2014

Reupload Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:28, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Add more shading to the haunch/back leg/hip/whatever it is and define the light on the tail. 6:31 AM, Sun Oct 26, 2014

Reupload I think it's his side, belly to back. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sure that there would be some light on the paws, though. 17:14, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I've added a bit to his right paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:44, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten/blur/smudge the shading from where it extends from the belly up to the back. It looks really dark and a little paintbrushy compared to the shading over <--- here. I think this is almost ready. =)  13:32, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload =) --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:15, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail/paw shading; wouldn't there be some light on his chest? 00:42, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

I define the tail or paw even more it's going to be too dark I think. You want me to make it lighter? And you mean a bit right next to his left leg for the chest? --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:53, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and chest, yes. Also, maybe add some shading to the haunch? Looks a bit flat. 00:56, 10/30/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:10, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Did you add shading to the haunch? It still looks flat. Hmm... To make your light source make sense, try adding shading where the red is and taking away where the blue is on this. 01:18, 10/30/2014

Reupload Thanks! That has helped a lot! --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:37, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Fill in the shading here as it's leaking away. Also, no problem, I'm here to help any time you need it. c: 03:11, 10/30/2014

Reupload :) --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:49, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

define the lighter parts on his tail. 03:39, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I only defined it a tad. Anymore and it would get too hard to see the shading I think. --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:45, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. 20:25, 11/4/2014

Reupload Point proven XD --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:13, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o  ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either.

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  -  Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 20:09, 10/24/2014

Re-uploaded - I tried x3 -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll work on it, in a few hours. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

You see the shading that's on...uh, I want to say the lower back? Pretty sure that's what that is... can you smooth that out a bit? I'm not sure the smudges should be so visible.

Re-uploaded - shshsh-ading, dun dun dun. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  10:49, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy on the tail. 11:00 Mon Oct 27

It actually looks blotchy all over^^ give it all a little blur or smudge over..whichever you do. 22:37, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Should be slightly better but it may appear blotchy because that's how I shade... ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:16, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Try using Gaussian blur (if you don't already/don't blur shading) 1:33 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

Re-uploaded - I do use Gaussian blur, but I did it on this one, but the shading messed up. So I've tried to blur it as much as I can without messing it up. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

What opacity are you blurring on? For blurring shading I usually just put it on 100(the highest setting on GIMP). Blur it some more. If you were not already, try blurring on 100 opacity. 13:28, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

I blur it on 30. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred with opacity on 100 before turning it back down to 30. Hopefully I can master this. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's looking good! Define the tail shading some more. 03:59, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the shading on the haunch and face could use more blurring/smudging. 12:46, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I never realized what a pain, shading on solid cats was. In the future I think I'll stick to tabbies and such. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  13:17, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

oOPS, i'll fix the face later ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   13:19, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on this ---> paw and blur the shading on this <--- paw. 14:32, November 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out. 3:03 PM, Sun Nov 2, 2014

Re-uploaded - the gaussian blur is everywhere -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:45, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the light on the paws. 20:26, 11/4/2014

Re-uploaded - This shading is KILLING ME xD -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   20:35, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste by (her) left paw, and the shading is leaking from the lineart a bit on the side. 22:15, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - You must have eagle vision, I couldn't even see it until I squinted.. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   16:34, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add a highlight onto the left shoulder, the shading there looks a bit strange with the way the lights going. Also, can you define the tail shading a bit? Brick  The Bite of '87  17:17, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - DUN, I swear if someone tells me to tweak the shading I'll scream. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:37, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ For Approval
this is rubbish. Sooooo rubbish. 19:33 Thu Oct 23

Lighten up the front paws a bit and the shading. It's fine ^^ Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 19:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks 19:40 Thu Oct 23

Lol did you forget the earpink? I don't see a trace of it anywhere. 20:00, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

The base color appears to be a little bit darker than her kit and apprentice (both of which I made), so have a screenshot of an unshaded head from the apprentice for the coloring.

Blur the shading some, it looks blotchy. 13:26, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I kinda like this.....I accidently deleted the ear-pink layer before I saved :'D <span style="">16:28 Fri Oct 24

I'd say to add a little more earpink. Its really nice, though ^^ 16:47, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Nah I think she has enough on there. A lot of images have been approved with that type of earpink style. 18:10, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups You saw it when it had been reuploaded, Frosty lmao <span style="">18:19 Sat Oct 25

Define the shading depth a tad, and I think the shading is receding from the lineart in some places. 17:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, changes might be showing, or they could be not. IDK <span style="">17:39 Sun Oct 26

Hm it looks like you darkened the shading. Defining the depth of the shading does include dakening, but it is really about adding different dimensions to it. So maybe you could lighten it back up a shade, and then where the body is farthest from the light, darken it; In crevices, in between 2 body parts, wherever the farthest parts are from the light, that's kind of where you give it a little darken. I hope this helps. =) 12:36, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I think I did this right? <span style="">13:02 Mon Oct 27

Reups, blurred the shading <span style="">18:13 Mon Oct 27

The one back paw looks pretty black. Lighten it up a bit 13:57, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, ran the dodge tool over it a few times <span style="">14:05 Tue Oct 28

It appears the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back. 23:27, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <span style="">23:15, 10/29/2014

Quiet Rain (Ancient) - CBA
…those spots looked a lot more smudged in photoshop… 23:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

they're hard on see on her queen, but she's got a few stripes on her tail, face, and legs (I think for legs) 23:32, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the spots. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:03, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Make the spots more hard-edged. <span style="">0:58 Mon Oct 27

How is s/he supposed to smudge them //and// make them more hard-edged at the same time?? 11:12, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe make them hard edged and then smudge them? =3 12:28, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Wouldn't that get Scarlet exactly where s/he is now? Unless s/he uses the hard edge smudge tool...? 12:44, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

She'd want to smudge the spots first to give them the sort of textured look of the spots of the original image, then use the sharpen tool on them. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:07, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? 22:42, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, it hasn't even been /5/ days, so I don't think you should be asking that, Shinx. Don't take this the wrong way, but please wait a little longer next time? <span style="">20:54 Thu Oct 30

I'm sorry >< I just figured that since images are usually declined after a week after a comment with no uploads, asking about halfway through that time seemed like a good idea (plus I remember seeing people ask at about three days before..?) :/ 21:07, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Asking at four days is perfectly acceptable. There is no rule that states five days must have passed- I know people who appreciate being reminded around the three - five day window. I ask at four to give a user another three days to make sure they reupload. There is nothing wrong with asking when she did. =/

Oh, whoops! I knew that... pfft. Sorry, Shinx! <span style="">0:29 Fri Oct 31

Withdrawing due to computer issues that probably won't be fixed for a while seriously… laptop won't even load photoshop for me to even work on Rain… >.>   01:44, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

May I take over? <span style="">2:04 Sun Nov 2

Re-uploaded. <span style="">2:38 Sun Nov 2

as said before, she needs stripes on her tail, face, and legs (though not much on her front ones) 03:37, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">14:13 Sun Nov 2

CBA? 22:13, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Heronwing (App) - For Approval
I tried ,., I think he looks weird... 20:56, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

The texture needs to flow in the direction on the fur, and be consistent. The tip of the tail, paws, ears, and muzzle need to be black, and the shading on the midsection is leaking from the lineart. If you need help with texture let me know. <span style="">21:01, 10/29/2014

Reuploaded Thanks for the texturing help ^^ 23:46, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the texture on the shoulder and back leg and add the black muzzle, paws, ears, and tail tip. <span style="">23:50, 10/29/2014

Reuploaded 00:18, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink? 00:40, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Earpink is fine. The entire ear under the earpink needs to be black though. <span style="">00:47, 10/30/2014

Reuploaded 00:56, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more and lower the opacity a bit. It's throwing the colour off. <span style="">03:14, 10/30/2014

Oops, forgot to say to lower the opacity of the texture some, as well. <span style="">03:14, 10/30/2014

Reuploaded 10:32, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the fur still needs to flow with the body more. I'd recommend looking at something like this to get an idea of how it should go. 12:45, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Did you lighten anything? It looks the same. I mean to make the highlights less visible because they're too bright. Same with the texture. Just a little bit with the texture, and quite a lot with the highlights. <span style="">16:46, 10/30/2014

Reuploaded I made it darker and added more stripes to make it look more dark. 17:28, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Texture still needs to be lightened. <span style="">19:57, 10/30/2014

The texture looks more like stripes than anything else and this should be named File:Heronwing.apprentice.png <span style="">4:16 PM, Sat Nov 1, 2014

Vixen, I'm just gonna slide in here and rename this for you. =)

ReuploadedSorry I haven't updated much. Mom took away my 'recreational' rights to my laptop. *shrugs* 16:06, November 3, 2014 (UTC)

Try making the texture look a little like this. If that isn't a clear enough image, I did Lizardpaw with the same type of texture. It's not as blurred as most texture, so it can be difficult to get it just right. Don't blur it as much, and look for a very rich texture-look. Hope this helps =) 13:29, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :D I hope this looks right but I tried to do the texture like you said Frosty. 15:11, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

You're welcome. It looks pretty good! Now what is your shading color? It seems to be the same color as the pelt, so it makes the texture disappear. Make your shading color #000000 and put it on lightly, then adjust as you go so it doesn't mask the texture, but so it also is defined. If you want a texture tutorial from me let me know on my talk and I'll send you a video. Provide your email too. =) 17:42, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded My color was the pelt color whoops lol. I couldn't undo far enough so I tried to fix it but I could re-do it again. 18:30, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add a highlight to the face or define the shading a bit as it's looking a bit flat. Brick  The Bite of '87  19:16, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:39, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) (Elder) ~ For Approval
Ohmigosh this was hard Tabbies are definitely not my strong suit.. . I don't think I did her much justice, and this nowhere near as good as the rest of her images. Changes are here if they're not showing. Comments? 03:43, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Wow I don't think this has ever happened to me before..comments? 00:40, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

It clearly says at the top of the page that you must wait at least three days before asking for comments on your image. Please do not ask for comments until then- if I see you doing it again, I will be declining your image. Even if it's only a couple hours, three days is three days.

As for your image, the stripes on the apprentice and warrior appear to be a bit more...swirly, so to say, and thicker in some places. These look too thin and uniform. I'm not sure how to suggest tweaking those stripes, since this is a Mounty pattern, aka "madness incarnate".

Well it technically has been three days, no matter the few hours. Sorry I was sure I had posted at the top of the hour but I guess it had been a few hours after. It won't happen again.

Can the OA of either the apprentice or the warrior give me their file so I can take a glance at it? Just email it to me. Thank you! 01:56, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

It was not three days according to the clock, and we go by the clock for everything. Also, the OAs of the images you're asking for are both Mounty, and she no longer has the files. You're on your own with this, sorry.

Re-uploaded. It's cool, I'm used to it. And yes Mounty was an amazing charartist..that's why this is so hard. Well I thickened the stripes and made them more swirly and kinda crazy-like. 21:35, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

I don't know if the changes are showing or not. Would you mind uploading your image to ezimba?

There you go..I also re-uploaded it to the wiki just in case it didn't register. 23:25, November 3, 2014 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck. This is amazing! <span style="">23:32 Mon Nov 3

Re-uploaded. Thank you! 00:34, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Enlargen the ear pink and define the shading on the head. Wow, those changes really weren't showing. o.o

Re-uploaded. Lol I know right? x3 12:50, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

I think the stripes need to be lightened a bit? They look fainter on the other images. <span style="">14:41, 11/4/2014

Define the facial shading while your at it. This is really good =)-- 21:33, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you =) This is as much as I'm gonna lighten them, Ferk, because if I lighten them anymore I don't they'll match too much. 23:42, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

I'd say lighten the stripes a very small amount, like 3 or 4 on the opacity bar, and it'd match better 16:44, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

I respect your comment but I hope you don't mind if I ask for another opinion. Because I lightened them a lot already and I feel if I lighten them anymore they just won't match. 17:36, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Just a little bit? I mean, no more than what Shinx said, anyways. They are fairly light on the other images.

Star Flower (Ro) ~ For Approval
Yo. 00:02, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Very pretty. :) Lighten that shading on the chest a touch? Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:46, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

re-up she needed white too 01:09, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front two legs and on the face as well. Also brighten up the white in general- it's been stated it's pure white, so it should probably stand out a fair bit if they're making that kind of comment about it.

Mouse Ears (Ro) ~ For Approval
Oh my god i am so proud. Anyway ticked tabby so thats not some kinda texture, smudged shading the usual stuffs. 00:10, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

smudge the shading on the body some? 04:04, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 10:32, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Would you lighten the shading a tad? I can't see the stripes through it. This is pretty! 12:21, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Thank you! 12:37, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading (if there is any), and possibly the light on the front paw farthest from us. 21:27, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 11:43, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Sun Shadow (Lo) - For Approval
I did ask Beebs about this, and she said that Sun Shadow does meet PC's guidelines to be classified as a loner, so here he is.

maybe darken him a tad? he sorta looks like a dark grey to me. 12:38, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Odd, that shade is what I normally use for black cats. Must have been the highlights or something..

Blur the shading a veeerrryyy slight bit, and perhaps add a highlight to the shoulder to give the image more depth? 14:34, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? 21:26, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tweaked the color since my file somehow revered to its original coloring.

Slate (Ro) ~ For Approval
I'm not a huge fan of how the texture on this came out. Comments? 01:52, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

no this is good, honestly! define the light and shading on the legs. 04:02, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! 13:15, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. Forgot to save the changes. 13:19, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad bit, I can barely see it. 21:26, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:53, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Mud Paws (Ro) - For Approval
weh?? <span style="">04:00, 11/4/2014

Define the ear pink or change the color of it or something- I can't see it at all.

reup <span style="">14:14, 11/4/2014

Some of the texture seems a little rough and abrupt. Like where it's going down the back and then down the legs. Could you make the transition a bit smoother? I think this is beautiful. =) 18:24, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

The texture is fine, methinks. 18:26, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Holly (Ro) ~ For Approval
Amber confirmed the pelt colour for me; comments? I'll guarantee that they got her name and description from Hollyleaf 22:12, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the shading on the tail, body, and head? <span style="">22:16, 11/4/2014

I looked high and low in The Blazing Star, and I couldn't find a mention of black anywhere that was referring to her- all mentions were about Tall Shadow, Cloud Spots, or Lightning Tail..

I hope you didn't make a mistake, Amber. What page was it? 23:24, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

I didn't see any mention of her pelt being black. I know around the section where it talks about her early in the book, it mentions Mud Paws' black paws, and earlier about Lightning Tail. Other than that, i didn't see a color mentioned for her. 18:43, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna read through The Blazing Star once more to see if I can find a mention. If I can't find it, we're gonna need to decline this until a cite can be found for her pelt color. If we do find one, you should be asked first if you want her image, imho.

Quiet Rain (Lo) ~ For Approval
23:19, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Her tummy looks flat, other than that, amazing as ever, David. <span style="">23:30, 11/4/2014

Petal (Ro) (Queen) ~ Withdrawn
So soon after Tornear :'D This failed so badly by the way and I'm not sure if you had to use a non-pregnant queen blank or whatever since she never had kits of her own :/ The Fox Girl (talk) 07:59, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Uhhh, she needs a non-pregnant queen blank, and we haven't sorted that out yet. So I think this needs to be declined until it does get sorted out? Sorry if I'm wrong. 10:37, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing The Fox Girl (talk) 10:49, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

One Eye (Ro) - For Approval
The shading might be a bit too dark, and I might play around with the mottles, but I think it turned out alright. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:51, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit? This is amazing! i love how bushy he is   Brick   The Bite of '87  16:01, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. :D I had a ton of fun with that lineart. And the shading has been lightened. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:21, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a bit, and blur/smudge the shading behind the ear closest to us. This is wicked cool!! =) 18:28, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And thanks! :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 20:42, November 5, 2014 (UTC)