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Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o  ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either.

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  -  Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 20:09, 10/24/2014

Re-uploaded - I tried x3 -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll work on it, in a few hours. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

You see the shading that's on...uh, I want to say the lower back? Pretty sure that's what that is... can you smooth that out a bit? I'm not sure the smudges should be so visible.

Re-uploaded - shshsh-ading, dun dun dun. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  10:49, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy on the tail. 11:00 Mon Oct 27

It actually looks blotchy all over^^ give it all a little blur or smudge over..whichever you do. 22:37, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Should be slightly better but it may appear blotchy because that's how I shade... ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:16, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Try using Gaussian blur (if you don't already/don't blur shading) 1:33 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

Re-uploaded - I do use Gaussian blur, but I did it on this one, but the shading messed up. So I've tried to blur it as much as I can without messing it up. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

What opacity are you blurring on? For blurring shading I usually just put it on 100(the highest setting on GIMP). Blur it some more. If you were not already, try blurring on 100 opacity. 13:28, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

I blur it on 30. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred with opacity on 100 before turning it back down to 30. Hopefully I can master this. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's looking good! Define the tail shading some more. 03:59, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the shading on the haunch and face could use more blurring/smudging. 12:46, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I never realized what a pain, shading on solid cats was. In the future I think I'll stick to tabbies and such. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  13:17, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

oOPS, i'll fix the face later ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   13:19, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on this ---> paw and blur the shading on this <--- paw. 14:32, November 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out. 3:03 PM, Sun Nov 2, 2014

Re-uploaded - the gaussian blur is everywhere -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:45, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the light on the paws. 20:26, 11/4/2014

Re-uploaded - This shading is KILLING ME xD -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   20:35, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste by (her) left paw, and the shading is leaking from the lineart a bit on the side. 22:15, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - You must have eagle vision, I couldn't even see it until I squinted.. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   16:34, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add a highlight onto the left shoulder, the shading there looks a bit strange with the way the lights going. Also, can you define the tail shading a bit? Brick  The Bite of '87  17:17, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - DUN, I swear if someone tells me to tweak the shading I'll scream. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:37, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is looking a little blotchy; try either blurring/smudging it to smooth it out a bit? Also, there should be more shading on the face, and the tail and paw's shading could be defined a bit. im sorry. -- 22:32, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, first of I uploaded an old file stupid me, second of all I'll work on it tomorrow and finally I am screaming   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:33, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the nose pink, so I suggest putting some nose pink. 02:54, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Actually tiger, s/he shouldn't put any nosepink on this image. It's a black (Well, dark gray) cat. They usually have black noses. 13:36, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - more screaming I couldn't find the old file (probably didn't save it) scrapped the shading and re-did it; the changes are here - http://oi60.tinypic.com/103h6wy.jpg   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   17:09, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and strengthen the shading on the paws. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:17, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened shading, strengthened paw shading (made it darker there) and I changed the position of the eyes, which I think have made quite the difference. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   11:38, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm.. define the tail shading. Also, I think the area near the nearest leg has receding shading. 20:18, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Defined tail shading, and expanded shading on nearest leg. Think I'm getting the hang of shading... — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   11:06, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

The shading seems to be bleeding away from the edge of the belly. Maybe smudge it back towards the line? Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:57, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on the left front leg is blotchy, smooth it out a little? 15:52 Tue Nov 11

Withdrawing because of work. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   21:58, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I'll take over. I changed the heading for you :)  17:23 Thu Nov 13

Reups 18:05 Thu Nov 13

Lighten the shading, and possibly blur it. I spy a tiny bit of shading leaking from the lineart on the bottom of the side. 22:18, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 16:50 Fri Nov 14

Lighten up the shading on the flank and define the light on the tail. 16:15 Sun Nov 16

Reups 16:52 Sun Nov 16

Lighten the shading on the back and tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Just popping in to warn you that your monthly limit's almost up! 21:28 Tue Nov 18

I think that'd only count if Firrel were still working on it. Amber only took over recently, she should have most of her time left. After all, it wouldn't be fair to her otherwise. 22:40, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Oh lol sorry. Hawky wasn't paying attention cuz she's tired. Wow I am the worst SW in history 23:15 Tue Nov 18

Yo, Amber, you might wanna reupload soon ^_^ 12:20, November 20, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, I just got banned from the computer so I'll try and sneak on... I made the file but being the idiot I am I forgot to reup -.- 13:16 Thu Nov 20

Reups (btw activity will be spotty this week) 17:02 Thu Nov 20

The shading still looks really dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 07:47, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

It looks as though there is some waste by the outer side of the tail. 01:39, November 22, 2014 (UTC) *correct me if I am wrong* 01:39, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

There's no waste. I think it's fine. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:42, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

You know, shading darkness has always been artists choice, as long as it doesn't screw up the base color or look like paintbrush shading. So I think it's fine and it works well with this color. Could you try to make the shading curve more with the body shape? And add some shading to < this side of the chest. It's looking good! 13:21, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.

You still workin' or...? 10:33, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, lol I keep uploading the file but I just forget to reup (derp) <span style="">12:58 Tue Nov 25

Define the shading on the legs, and I know it's artist's choice, but please lighten the shading on the back and tail a bit, doesn't have to be a lot. And define the light on it some more, I can't see it 09:39, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading on the chest a little bit?-- 23:35, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Snake (DotC) (Alt Ro) ~ For Approval
I don't like how this came out. =P -- 01:21, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

It looks fine don't beat yourself up lol. Define the texture a little, and define your lightsource. The head is telling me it's coming from one direction, and the body another, and the tail another. 12:59, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Texture is fine. <span style="">20:27, 11/6/2014

Texture looks alright to me, though it could be darkened a smidge. I agree about the lightsource though. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:29, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think if you just removed the shading along the back (but left a bit behind the head near the neck) that the light source would be fine. <span style="">20:32, 11/6/2014

Re upped  01:05, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

blur/smudge/whatever you do the shading on the neck and belly a bit <span style="">21:18, 11/9/2014

Reupped 22:20, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading.

Define the light on the face - liking the texture! 16:31, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped 23:19, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Hm, correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't there also be shading on parts of his back? Like, near his tail and extending a little more past the neck? I could be wrong, and if I am, I'm sorry. Also, please define the light on the legs; I don't think they'd all be in shade.

Re upped I defined the light on the legs. I didn't change the shading because I did that and other users said it made the light source confusing. 00:16, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Fair enough, Tiger. I'd rather you go with the majority opinion on this. Maybe define the shading a bit more on the legs? I know it's there, but it's kinda hard to see it- like maybe have an unblurred part of shading on a lower opacity, kinda like what I did for the legs on Rippleclaw's warrior. If you're unsure of what I mean and if I'm making no sense, I will gladly explain and provide examples. It looks like the shading is overblurred in some spots, mainly on the feet, and it looks like it takes up a bit more space than it should, and in the case of the frontmost least visible back leg, (god that was phrased so nicely, I apologize- I've been killing Geth for the past four hours and my brain is fried) the shading looks like it could be receding.

Re upped I redid the shading in the legs. If the shading is still odd, can I have some examples please? Thank you. 01:43, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped I redid the entire shading, with help from Breeze. Thanks Breeze. 02:34, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

One last re up 03:00, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe blur around the unshaded circle on their side or give it a tiny tad of shading, or both. It's just blinking at me.--Stealthfire star (talk) 05:20, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the circle: wider and taller. Also define the depth of the shading, it's looking a bit flat. 14:08, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped Expanded the light. 03:36, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

It's still blinking at me. It's better. Maybe lighten the shading slightly? --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:42, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:09, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten it on the back slightly? Burntclaw (talk) 12:48, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think if I lighten the shading up, it'll look flat, so I'll leave it the same unless someone says otherwise. 01:53, November 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re ups 02:12, November 20, 2014 (UTC)

Add another layer of slightly darker shading, for depth. 12:21, November 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped 22:49, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. And maybe have the shading get darker as it gets farther from the light, and have it get lighter where it's closer to the light. If I dont make sense, I'm sure someone will come along and define what I'm trying to say. 13:27, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

I tried to blur it, but it looked overblurred when I did it. And I'm kind of confused about what you mean about the lightness. 19:26, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

What they mean is to have the shading fade as it gets closer to the light. One way to do this is to have two layers of shading, the darker one being thinner than the lighter one. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:03, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped 20:09, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Blue the shading or smudge it idk what you do lmao. Define the light on the front legs some. <span style="">21:29, 11/24/2014

Re upped 00:05, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Any comments? It's been three days. Am I being impatient? 00:09, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

Re-Uploaded If I need to smooth it out more, please let me know. 05:40, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think all you need to do now is just lighten up the opacity on the shading layer a bit - then I think this could be good to go. 10:42, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Star) ~ For Approval
eh..colorpicked from elder. Comments? 23:27, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the main part of the body. Also give more depth to the eyes and smudge the ear pink into the ear a bit more.

The shading is throwing off the color a little bit; could you lighten it a tad? If you'd prefer not too, thats fine with me. 23:39, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Lol wow I just realized you all were staring at the old version of the image for 24 hrs. I'm so sorry, I didn't notice that mine didn't overwrite the prev. version. I tried re-uploading it and here's a link to ezimba for my version. 13:15, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Yours had been showing, and my comment still stands about the ear pink- please smudge it a bit more.

Well they hadn't for me. I'll re-upload later if I've got time. Is the shading better? I had changed it after you commented but then I saw the old version when I got on so I'd thought you were looking at the old. 14:43, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I think the shading should actually extend the rest of the way, like to where the base of the tail is. I've never seen a source that looks like that put up for approval.

I'll re-upload in the morning or in the evening. Sorry, I've just been really busy. 08:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope that's better. And yeah I like making up new sources when I have a little time to mess around..lol 12:42, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, especially around the top part of the back and the tail. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:39, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'll lighten it on the back, but I think the tail is fine unless someone says otherwise. I always define the tail shading on shorthairs a little more than the rest of the body so it's not flat. And so the light and shading are perfectly visible. 13:49, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Ya gonna reup this, Frosty? 09:48, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Yup I'll reup soon. My computer didn't want to open my internet. I think it may work now. 15:53, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Woah. She is incredible. Define the shading on the chest then smudge just a hare. 01:42, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you =) also I made her eyes look brighter, I thought they needed a little something. 19:44, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

Take a size one brush and smudge the ear pink a bit. On a cat, it's kinda whispy-like instead of more solid like, and I think I asked you to do this before but I don't know if you did or not. Only had Leggy drill this into me a million and a half times and seeing enough pictures of cats'll do that to you. Also, lower the opacity on the chest a bit- you can see the stripes on the other images through it, and I can't quite see them on this.

Re-uploaded. Lol yeah..I hope that's better. I finally got the stupid earpink to submit. xD 01:01, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

What color is your shading? It appears to desaturate the image, and parts of it look a bit grayer than they should be.

Hailstar (K) ~ For Approval
He's so cute :). Burntclaw (talk) 09:03, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded couldn't find the xcf file for it so I had to redraw it :/Burntclaw (talk) 09:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Hum... The shading seems a bit misplaced, there is some shading on his left cheek. Correct me if I'm wrong. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:04, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. By the way, I accidentally used my sister's account to re-upload the picture, so it will say it has been re-uploaded by The Fox Girl. Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups removed some waste.

Darken the base coat a tad, and define the light on the legs. <span style="">12:56 Sun Nov 16

Re-uploaded I'm pretty sure the coat color was fine... Cause I color picked from his apprentice version, but I darkened it like you said so. I also defined the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 13:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. <span style="">13:13 Sun Nov 16

Just removed it as soon as I realized after the re upload :'D Burntclaw (talk) 13:16, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy, smooth it out? <span style="">13:17 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups. Is it better? Burntclaw (talk) 13:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

It still looks rather blotchy; you can try blurring it with the blur tool at rate 100 instead of using gaussian blur, and it's causing some of the shading to recede at the lineart. I can't see where your light source is, either. Also, there's waste all around the image. <span style="">16:22 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups Completely re-did the shading. Never realized shading was so complicated :'D. Also removed all of the waste. Burntclaw (talk) 04:11, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's still waste The Fox Girl (talk) 04:30, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Burntclaw (talk) 05:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Give the shading a good blur/smudge. Look at examples of other solid coloured cats for help. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure if I overdid it. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more, and define it in the legs. Also, every time you do something, make sure to select outside the lineart and erase on every layer, because there's still waste. 07:14, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I hope changes are showing, because the internet is being weird again. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make the eyes look a bit more yellow, like his Starclan image? Brick  The Bite of '87  15:50, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the eyes are fine, can you get rid of the waste and define the shading a tad please. <span style="">16:01 Mon Nov 17

Re-ups Not sure if I got ridden of all the waste Burntclaw (talk) 04:01, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Getting rid of all the waste can be a pain with long-furs. Zoom in really close to find it all. It's a smaller image so it won't be much of a hustle. Look especially around the spiky parts of the fur, there is one pixel wastes hiding there. Also, can you darken the shading slightly? --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:29, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure I've gotten rid of all the waste. Just worried that changes aren't showing because of my internet -_-. Also darkened the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 05:56, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got it! Now, the shading is leaking away from the lineart, meaning it's not right next to the lineart. Even one pixel off is noticeable. Try even moving the shading to the right or carefully add more shading so it will be alined. --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:17, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I fixed the problem. XD Burntclaw (talk) 06:27, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got his left shoulder, can you do the same with the rest of shading? The rest of his side, legs and tail I think where it needs work.--Stealthfire star (talk) 06:34, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Jeez, I didn't know shading was so complicated! :D Pretty sure I got this right. Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I think with solid cats is especially focused. It's still leaking away from the lineart. Look really closely to see the gaps. Look at other pictures for examples. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:25, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 07:32, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Much better! At his side, lighten the shading slightly and make sure there is shading on his spiked fur and all his back paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:40, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I spy a little waste at his side The Fox Girl (talk) 12:18, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I made things worse -_- Also, accidentaly used my sister's account to reupload it again :/ Burntclaw (talk) 13:23, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Naw. It's fine, as an artist never doubt yourself, believe in your own work. I've been an artist(in real life. on here for only a couple of years) for many years, first thing I had to learn was to believe in my painting or drawing or even my image on here. Now that I've done my pep talk xD, it looks like the shading is receding from the lineart on the tail, and the back especially. If you add more shading along the lineart it'll fix right up. =) 14:04, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 08:41, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still seeing waste around the image. Sometimes when the fancy ways don't work, just take a size one hard-edge eraser and go erase it pixel by pixel. 16:00, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure all the waste is gone. Also, I was just wondering, how do you become an apprentice? Burntclaw (talk) 08:54, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

If a senior warrior, deputy, or leader thinks you know what you're doing, they can promote you to apprentice. Which I'll go ahead and do. 10:56, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! :) Burntclaw (talk) 11:06, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

There's still a little waste underneath every hair spike on ---> this side. And I see a pixel or two in between his legs. 13:30, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups btw I used my sis's account to upload it Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and face shading some? <span style="">21:27, 11/24/2014

Smooth out the shading, too. And I think there are still a few pixels of waste in between the fur spikes over here > ^^ 01:58, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

If there is more waste call me a mouse. Burntclaw (talk) 05:09, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the earpink is fine. The Fox Girl (talk) 09:03, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Ferk, actually. Please define the earpink. 10:28, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 10:36, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I still can hardly see it, please define it more. 10:44, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, it's defintely visible now. Burntclaw (talk) 12:26, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and that blotchy bit on the part below the (our right) shoulder. Also, are there two white pixels in his back foot? 20:41, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

It looks like the shading's leaking away around here and a bit on the legs, but that could be my eyes. Regardless, this is a really good image- well done!

Re-ups Thanks! :) Burntclaw (talk) 08:46, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Extend the tail shading to the tip, please. Also; is your shading layer on top of your earpink layer? One side looks darker than the other on my screen; Mind fixing that? if not, its completely fine. =)-- 23:40, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Please remember to sign with 4 tildes (~'s). And why is having the shading layer on top of the earpink layer bad?? I /always/ have my shading layers above the earpink layer. Ears have shading too, so I think that's fine. But I do agree about the tail shading, and it's also leaking away from the tail lineart ^^ 23:49, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

It honestly does not matter either way if the shading layer is above or below the ear pink. I personally put my ear pink above the layer of shading, since it's smudged and blurred so much you can barely see it in most cases anyways. Commenting solely for ear pink unless it's like neon pink or purple really isn't necessary- it's fine as it is and each person will make it differently. There's no one way to do the ear pink on any of these blanks.

My bad; I forgot to sign with my signature. And alright =). My comment on the tail shading still stands, though. Could you also define the light on the front legs a bit, while your at it? I can barely see it.-- 00:02, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 08:56, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Lo) ~ For Approval
another cursed image, perhaps? 15:16, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the neck shading, perhaps? Lol, just don't withdraw this time ^_^ 15:45, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups I'm not withdrawing this time 19:49, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the back a tad? This is beautiful :) The Fox Girl (talk) 00:30, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, could you could lighten up the whole shading just a bit? <span style="">0:35 Wed Nov 26

Define the ear pink slightly? Burntclaw (talk) 08:47, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine. They do have other images to match, and I can see it well. 13:24, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups I can see the earpink fine 18:15, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the neck/facial shading, please.-- 23:40, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but I can see it very well, and think it's fine. 23:53, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna agree with you, Sorrel. It's fine ^^ <span style="">00:03, 11/28/2014

Can you define the ear pink? Remember, it doesn't mean darken (all the time), it means make more visible, and I honestly cannot see it at all.

Reups it was on top all of the shading, so it was the colour that was throwing it off. I made the colour more pinkish, and I can see it fine now. 10:37, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Jake (Ki) ~ For Approval
He has a cite, so I can post this, right? 13:12, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Lighten up the face shading a tad? Burntclaw (talk) 13:35, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, it's the same shade as the rest of the shading, and it's not that dark V_V 14:29, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. I can't tell they're there.

Reups 10:42, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Half Moon (Ki) - For Approval
my queen <3. The shading is icky and if I'm asked to define it, please don't expect much as it looks awful any darker than this. <span style="">00:06, 11/28/2014 She is absolutely beautiful! <3 Could you brighten up the cheek just a little? NikiandCats (talk) 03:19, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined a bit. I know it's there, but I'm having issues seeing it in some places, mainly the main part of the body.

Smokepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
prepare yourselves for a kit party! XD The shading isn't as bad as I thought it would be. --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:31, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. This is gorgeous though! The Fox Girl (talk) 02:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I really love everything about this picture! Could you lighten the face a smudge? NikiandCats (talk) 10:11, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:21, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can hardly se it. <span style="">09:27 Fri Nov 28

Pinestar (Ki) - For Approval
Hi, my name is Jayce and I really love Pinestar. Have a baby version of him. PC implemented a thing saying all cats with confirmed littermates or parents get kit ranks, so here we go.

Blur the shading a bit more on the neck? Burntclaw (talk) 07:55, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Windflight (Ki) ~ For Approval
a la kit 05:58, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Dustpelt (K) - For Approval
Since the new PC thing passed, I figured I'd try out Dustpelt's pattern. I'll probably play with it more later, I'm not entirelly happy with it yet. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:13, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just me, but I can't see the earpink. Can you define it? It might just be my screen though. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is fine. On another note, I spy some waste by the paws. Beautiful image Jayie ^^ <span style="">09:26 Fri Nov 28

Moonflower (Kit) ~ For Approval
I bet in three seconds, someone will tell me to either redo the stripes or define the shading. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:18, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tiny bit? 10:36, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not happy about the stripes :\ by the way, if this image gets approved, will I become a warrior? (this is my third image) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups My sis told me to define the tail shading The Fox Girl (talk) 11:44, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Snowbird (K) ~ For Approval


First character ever!! (I'm so proud of myself) Echorunner (talk) 12:50, November 28, 2014 (UTC)