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Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Near the top of the tail looks like some miscolored pixels. Can you fix those? 19:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur stick out more like the other images, rather then curve a bit. It should basically stand on end, like he got electrocuted or something. 22:50, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not good at tail tweaking... o3o Withdrawn. 22:59, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 99.58.201.247 23:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * That was me. o.e  23:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur at the base of the tail stick out more. 23:02, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, please don't critique the charart if the user taking over hasn't uploaded yet. 05:40, 16, 06, 2012

Reuploaded I tried :P  02:35, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more....poofy, for want of a better word. Skt Spoilers... 00:12, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Widen the tail a bit. =P 00:55, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little white pixel on the tail. Kinda towards the base, on the top.... *fails at describing where* 05:24, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

That's supposed to be there, dear. Zoom in and you'll see it's the space between to pieces of fluff. 00:48, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? .-. 06:11, 22, 06, 2012

Sorry, didn't have enough time because of school... But now that I'm free, I'll upload it later tonight. 13:35, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Didn't like the old one, so I did it again. :P  01:52, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the end of his tail a bit pointier? It looks like the tip got cut off XD 04:52 Sat Jun 23

add some fluff near the base of his tail -- 15:05, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
Added teh stripes to the tail~Comments? 11:08, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the stripes? They make the tail look purple. Skt Spoilers... 12:51, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaed o3o 11:58, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Try and make them look like her apprentice's. 20:29, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) - Tweaked
OA was Wildfire and he needed to be shaggy. I know, it doesn't match exactly to his other images but cat's shaggy fur can look different depending on the situation, and I think it looks cool. However, I can change it if I absolutely must. 15:27, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

This looks Really good, But I suggest maybe adding some more fur around the tail, and maybe his shoulder? Just my opinion. -- 09:27, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Ivy?

Dawn River (SC) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow and she needed her shading defined and demensionalized and her markings needed to look less like a texture (btw I actually found the exact texture in GIMP). If you want, I could add a few patches but that would require the tweaking of her queen, too, so I'd rather not. 16:02, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make her shading a bit less red? 23:33 Wed Jun 20

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular so that it looks more natural. 01:16, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine.

While this is up, it needs another color added to it. Whether it be white on the chest or something, or another shade of brown/ginger on the pelt, it needs one more to be a real tortie. A tortie is 3 colors, this is only 2. 03:32, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, If its okay I'm suggesting this, since this is up, maybe add some depth to the eyes? -- 09:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

And if possible, make the shading less..orange? Skt Spoilers... 12:16, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Someone's already said that Sky :/ I'll get it  15:00, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I like this one better; the second one (before the first one) was horrid e_e 00:15, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the texture, and define the shading some. :3 00:53, 24, 06, 2012

smudge the earpink a bit more -- 04:40, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to her tail. Comments? 19:25, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 22:36, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And this is what happens when you forget to save the xcf. file -_-  01:54, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more? c: 05:54 Sat Jun 23

Stormfur (Lo) - Tweaked
Tweaked to be darker. OA was me 01:17, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? 01:56, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:22, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a tiny bit? x3 02:53, 23, 06, 2012

Re-uploaded 04:01, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste. 04:01, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded Killed it 04:10, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ro) ~ Redone
OA was DJ, and it needed to match the kittypet. Again, all colors come from the kitypet/loner image, so please don't ask me to change them.

Define the haunch shading. 15:10, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit. 15:40, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the border of the markings on the tail. Breeze whisker  21:47, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Thin the shading on the body a bit. It's so think it looks a different color from the other images. 08:03, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Hollowbelly (W) - Redone
Not quite as epic as Cloudy's, but I think it turned out okay. I also decided to make him a short-hair to save me some grief. The old one--(oh gosh...) Over smudged, literally no shading, and just looked like a fluffy marshmallow with tar. Comments? 01:34, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. (oh, hush. xD)

Re-uploaded I will not hush! xD 04:13, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his haunch a tad -- 04:26, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white part of his nevk..or whatever it is. Mmmm tar marshmallow Skt Spoilers... 08:20, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:26, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Lo) ~ Redone
Before anyone starts complaining, I did get permission to redo this. It didn't match in the slightest and would have been really hard to tweak. Since it's my image I don't see a problem with redoing it. Comments?

Can you blur the smudges a little more?

Re-uploaded 20:33 Sun Jun 24

Blur the haunch shading a bit. Skt Spoilers... 22:29, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to the tail. OA was Maplepool with a tweak by me. Comments? 08:11 Sun Jun 24

Define the stripes a wee bit. 20:21, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:31 Sun Jun 24

Magpie (Lo) ~ Tweaked
If I need to say who the OA is, you guys are blind. <3 I wanted to make him long hair, and I re-did the shading.

I guess I'm blind then  Can you darken the hading a tiny bit on his muzzle and chest? 17:56, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, since it would make the white look darker than it needs to be. (  Me, you dork. XD   )

Orly. I knew that. Okay, can you at least lighten the shading on his haunch? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, but if others agree, I'll do it.

Hollowflight (A) - Redone
- His pale belly went too far into his stomach, he was too dark, and his stripes were too oversmudged. And oh my god I failed on this one. Especially the smudging...Comments? 22:11, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderstar (Lo) - Redone
...He gets green eyes because they look sexy. OA was Sweetflower with a redo by moi. Ugly patch is ugly x.x 22:39, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you remove the patch? (Unless it's going to be moved there.) 22:45, June 24, 2012 (UTC)