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Littlecloud(mc alt 2) ~ for approval
Do I like this? I cant tell. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 19:59, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

It was a good go! However, there are large issues to be addressed. None of the colors seem to match the Medicine Cat Apprentice that is on the page. First in the set it has to be matched. The pale placement also seems.to differ, the stripes are also sharper. They also seem a bit jagged or the likes on the apprentice too. I'm sure you can fix it no problem! SquidwardPlays 20:12, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Squid's right. This is supposed to match File:Littlecloud.mca.alt2.png and File:Littlecloud.FG-6.png. This is also supposed to uploaded as File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. 20:14, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oh and one more thing, there's waste at the base of the tail. SquidwardPlays 20:18, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

why would it be alt2? what was the first one?Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:29, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading as well.

This is Littlecloud's first alt (made by David), but it's not in use anymore. Just because chararts aren't in use, we still keep the original files up. —​​​

if you need the color swatch to match the mca alt I can provide that^^ my computer nuked the file somehow  though, but i do an alt kit still around if you need a file to look at

Due to the alt mentioned above by Echo, this would have to be renamed File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png. Mind fixing that real quick Owl ?Potato Flakin (talk) 21:47, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Missed Vec's comment. There's waste outside the tail. Potato Flakin (talk) 21:52, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

I know there is waste, as Squid said Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:08, December 28, 2018 (UTC)

Oops my bad, I'm very blind today.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, okay, therewere a range of other things wrong with that immage, and I am shocked no one commented how flat the shading was, or how the stripes were way to sharp, so I re-did it all (why it looked bad- i reasently got photoshop, i am bad at it.).Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:52, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

Re~up, that bit of waste... it will kill me somday. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:58, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I think this should use the long haired blank. Also, the stripes are overblurred. Sharpen them?

The file is still not named properly. It's mc.alt2 not alt2.mc. ^^ 17:05, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

I've renamed the file for you. Upload it under the name "Littlecloud.mc.alt2" from now on^

17:11, December 29, 2018 (UTC)

The darker stripes on the face should be thinner, and all of the stripes should be more jagged^^ There's also a slight layer of texture going underneath them, on the mca ~

Define your light source. Its pretty hard to distinguish it. If you need help with it, you may find the Apprentice Tutorials helpful. 16:43 Sun Dec 30

Still working? 00:05, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

If you are still working, there's this area outside the right hind leg that shouldn't be filled in. I'll send you a screenshot later when I have time to get on the computer.Potato Flakin (talk) 16:26, January 4, 2019 (UTC)

Here you go!Potato Flakin (talk) 04:24, January 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, sorry for the break, I just had thingd going on, and life, but I got it up! : )Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:57, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Up, that shading tho! I dont know what I was doing, but I fixed the shadingIm Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yes, much better. There are some things that still need to be addressed, but take your time. The stripes need to be smudged and sharpened a bit more. I would recommend you take the colors of his apprentice, or medicine cat apprentice. The earpink is much lighter on the other images, and the two stripes on the face are blotchy. Seperate them so they are two stripes, then smooth and sharpen them to match the kit. Whiten the white, and define the shading (have you tried tinting your shading? It's magic) This is very good Owlbite, you are doing well.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:04, January 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I sort-of like it.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Much better Owlbite! Whiten the white on the legs, thin out the face stripes, and define the shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:12, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, face stripes cant get any thiner. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:26, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

I understand. Where's your lightsouce here? If there is one please define it. Potato Flakin (talk) 04:29, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading too? I can't tell where the light source is either, but I think that may just be because I can't make out where a lot of the shading is. 13:14, January 7, 2019 (UTC) I will definitely the light, but look at the light in the eyes.Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 16:38, January 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't have white markings or pale around the earpink^

Lighten the earpink a little more, and remember, don't stress, the lightsource and other things are and easy fix, take your time.=)Potato Flakin (talk) 01:36, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

spooky, look at the offical art, look, there is white marks. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:59, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I cut the white down, but it is there on the offical art, and if I define the shading, it will make it look... just... bad. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:06, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I’m quite sure it’s supposed to be that pale color around the ears. I matched the same image you’re matching to when I did the other images in this alt set

Re-up, okay.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 03:03, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Owlbite, don't kill me, but I'm still very confused about your lightsource. I cannot see where the shading is.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:30, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that help? I removed some shading from the direct place of the light sorce, wich needed to be fixed anyways.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:00, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

can you make the shading darker? i think it'll make it more visible. that pattern is looking good 11:44, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, yeet.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:41, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png not Littlecoud -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:38, 1/09/2019 ]

Actually, it's not fully wrong. There's just a duplicate of File:Littlecloud.mc.alt2.png that's spelled wrong. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 09:40, 1/09/2019 ]

Define shading every but the paws. Define light on the paws. It's coming along! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:55, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, sorry about my splng!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:56, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry if it's a bother, but the paws' light could still be defined greatly. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 23:00, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I tryed, let me know if it needs more.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:10, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a lot of depth to the shading. I cannot see it. Also the leg stripes seem to be ending abruptly..?Potato Flakin (talk) 23:19, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, that is as dark as it will get, if you need me to do it more, msg me on discord, okay? because I need to talk to you, and get your help(and you cant do that here).<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:39, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the stripe at the top of the tail tip; it should be thicker to match the mca, and also even out the coloring and amount of the stripes on the front legs; there should be at least 5 on the < front leg, and 4 on the > front one

Re-up, the count seems a little... over of a responce, but I did it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:50, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light everywhere. You may find the apprentice tutorials helpful.Potato Flakin (talk) 01:16, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes a LOT. The leg stripes especially are unintelligible from everything else. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:28, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

The base color on the back leg nearest to us has white on the edges, the ear pink could be a little more defined. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:37, 1/10/2019 ]

Realized it is in the mca, sorry. -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:38, 1/10/2019 ]

There's some waste outside this ear.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:52, January 11, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm.. also what color are the berries? One screen tells me they're white but another screen tells me it's light green.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:05, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

cant work, im away from my drawing tablet, but the berries, I thought they were leaves, and they had little white flowers on them, I looked it up for refrence then first making it.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:50, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

catmint and borage were the plants<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:55, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Creative idea Owlbite! But since I'm confused about the color of the berries, I think they should be one color.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:38, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

there are no berries, they are flowers, and they are ment to be purple.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

The berries and leaves and be whatever color you want. Could you also make your pupil black? In addition, you seem to be having some trouble with light source. The shading should, for the limbs, only be on one side and not cover the entire limb. That's how we get that "3D effect" to show mass and depth. Your lightsource seems to be coming from the right, so the shading should only be on the left side of the limbs. What you have going on with the tail, flank and face is good. I've created a red line to help ya! Try to keep the shading to one side of the limbs like I demonstrated in red (the arrow is the direction your light is hitting your cat), even when blurring it. I hope this helps! ^^ 01:21, January 13, 2019 (UTC)

I WILL re-up later today or tomarow, but im working with photoshop, and it crashed ;~;' and school... but I WILL get them up!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:16, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, FINALY! And Vec, about making it black, as I have been told, and as I will say, that is my prefrence, and if you want, I will make it darker, but I prefer to not have it black. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 01:50, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink, I'm not seeing it. Colorpick off the apprentice possibly?Potato Flakin (talk) 03:00, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

re-up, all the colors are 100% correct. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 04:06, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more, and there's no stripes on the white part of the paws.Potato Flakin (talk) 04:13, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Ahhhh, I was unaware the pupil didn't have to be black. My apologies, then. ^^ 13:27, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, OH! now I see whatseemed off on the stripes! I couldnt tell! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 15:47, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes on the face? On his other images the lighter areas and stripes on his body appear more textured (not sure how else to describe it), could you try making them a rougher to match? On his other images, there's only four, thicker stripes on his tail too. You've improved so much since your first upload, keep it up!

16:37, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:12, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading? 13:17, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the shading. Define the light on the herbs and lighten the face stripes to match this. I like this!Potato Flakin (talk) 02:04, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the face stripes are correct, I adsked spooky for the color hex.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 05:27, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Burnt. I can't see the shading well. Please define the shading.

Thin out the face stripes again and define the earpink. I think you're overblurring the earpink which is making it disappear.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:20, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Shrink the yellow highlights; the app and kit have them, but they're very small patchy like things

Still working? You have until the 28th to reupload, which will trigger the one month limit. 16:43, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

ill give you the short, my art computer is my brothers, he dose homwork on it, and he got alot of homwork, and my computer broke, I just got it back on, re-up soon, later today probably.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 18:08, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, thank Starclan! I was working on this, and had to stop for a while, and in that time, the power shut off for a minut, and before, it crashed photoshop, so I am so happy it didnt this time!<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:45, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Shading tints are magic =) Anyways, the shading is a little big on the legs, it doesn't need to cover that much of the paw. Earpink is still overblurred as well, and define eye depthPotato&#61;) (talk) 23:47, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, the ear pink was not over blured, please dont assume it was, and if anything, I messed up the ear pink, because it it nolonger the same color as the others, but if you need it like this, okay, can I get another opinion of if it was seeable before? and the shading... what leg? and eyes are fine, 100% color picked from the image.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:00, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

You got some waste in these areas - this is looking so good! —​

Shouldn't have that yellow highlight on the center of the chest, they're only spread around the pelt/edges of the chest to match what the TUG image has. Also I think the issue with eye depth is because the pupil blends into the eye color, making them look purple-blue, when the other alts eyes are pure blue. You don't have to make the pupil pure black, but it should be more distinguishable from the main eye color

Recede leg shading, legs look very purplePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:42, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, i like the shading now, it looks almost... 3D.<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:52, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

The shading shouldn't cover the paws that much.. please recede itPotato&#61;) (talk) 02:55, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light majorly on all legs. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:02, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, re did the light. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 04:45, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Darken face stripes --> over there and thin face stripes over <-- herePotato&#61;) (talk) 00:35, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up, I will thee you this, I. Have. The. Correct. Colors.

Define the light on all four paws, define the shading depth on both front legs, mostly the left one. Smooth the shading on the tail. Can you make the stripes any rougher? They appear very soft here compared to his other images - might just be me though.

15:25, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

I will when I am home, but the tail shading is fine, and is one of the most smoothened parts,I spent time smoothening the shading,and I spent at least 2 minutes working on the tail, so it's as smooth as I can get it. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">❈ Love is Love, forever! ❈ =^.,.^= 16:07, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

I'm confused about the facial shading, it's <-- there as well as on top of the headPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:55, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Stripes on the tail should be a tad thinner

Smudge facial stripes, but not too muchPotato&#61;) (talk) 16:58, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval
Pose is from a reference, I can show it if need be. <span style="">20:10 Wed Jan 2

Sun these are absolutely astounding! Could you add either a tag or bell to the collar? There’s usually one. :) 20:16, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

Soooo cute! Can you move the collar a little bit down the neck? It kinda looks like it's choking them right now.. ^^' Also, the forearm closest to us looks overly thick. 23:22, January 2, 2019 (UTC)

woah!! love everyhting on this charart, i cant wait to see the next one. Starclanwilldarkme2 (talk) 00:16, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is amazing, Sun! Could you possibly make that <-- front leg a bit longer to match the length of the other? It seems a bit shorter. 03:28, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the lineart on the hind paws just a bit? 03:56, January 3, 2019 (UTC)

The front paw facing us feels a bit too chubby compared to the rest of the legs. Also, while I do understand what you're going for with the lil fatty fluff on the haunch to define the tummy, it looks a bit off. Plump cats don't really have their fat protruding past their haunch, and with them laying down like this, the fat would go lower to touch the ground bc of gravity. These are super cute ;; I adore the toe beans so so much!! —​​​​

Could be my personal preferences, but could you make the long haired's fur less.. spiky and give it more variation?

Hi Sun! You don’t have a limit like other art and take the time you need, but I just wanted to confirm that you’re still working? :) 17:42, January 8, 2019 (UTC)

I am! I'm just trying to enjoy my last week of break before the semester! I'll upload soon! <span style="">18:46 Tue Jan 8

I love it! If it dosent get aproved here, my wiki, Complete Warriors Wiki needs some. :) -Texaswild

No real rush, Sun, but this is just a bump in case you've gotten busy and forgotten about the blanks. (and also a reminder that they're still here in case anyone needs to comment) ​​​

--> this eye should be moved slightly or expanded in size.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:28, January 16, 2019 (UTC)​

Reuploaded This semester is gonna be hell. <span style="">17:20 Mon Jan 21

What's going on with the lines here on the short-furred blank? Slightly confused, and I assume it's just an oversight?

On both, could you thicken the lineart on the bottomside of the... I guess it'd be the wrist(?) of the > front leg?

The collars need to be moved down, they look like they're chokingPotato&#61;) (talk) 20:51, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

Woah what the hell happened to that...I'll check my layers in a little while. No clue why it did that. <span style="">23:21 Mon Jan 21

Um <-- this front leg on the longhair is thicker than said leg on shorthair, and the --> this eye's lineart on the longhair is thinner than the lineart of the shorthair's eyePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:11, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Apprentice Alt 2) ~ For Approval
I'm absolutely proud :) All colours from the alt star. Comments? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

You should be proud! Define the shading on the tail and paws? 18:33, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth shading a little on the shoulder back and haunch, add some to the forelegs and hindlegs farthest from us and soften the stripes, maybe add a handful more if you're able. This is very good! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:47, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the stripes some too? 18:51, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Screams bc I keep forgetting to mention things. Sharpen the gold on the shoulder and foreleg a little, and there's waste between the whiskers. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 18:52, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Is it better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

<-- this hind leg needs more white, there's a lot on the warrior alt. Also friendly reminder to upload under File:Feathertail.apprentice.alt2.png. It was misspelled earlier (it's fixed now)Potato Flakin (talk) 23:15, January 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm and the stripe placement would end up matching the warrior, as would everything else to it, since the warrior's the first in the set. Would you mind adding some white/very pale gray hairs up into the earpink, to match the set? I also think there'd be more, but thinner, stripes on the tail. You're doing excellent with this, by the way

Could you define/add some more stripes on the front paw furthest from us and the back paw furthest from us? And add some cream to the hind paw furthest from us too. 03:25, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

Nice image overall. I'll promote you into an apprentice.

Reups <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Could you maybe blur the white a little bit on her right front paw? -- 𝕊𝕚𝕝    𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕗𝕦𝕣    𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~     𝕚'𝕞 𝕠𝕟 𝕒 𝕙𝕖𝕝𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕒𝕥𝕠𝕣~   [ 13:42, 1/10/2019 ]

Sure, I'll do it when I'll come home :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Reups :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Could you define the shading overall, especially on the gray? 22:03, January 10, 2019 (UTC)

I do think there'd need to be more visible pale parts on the belly and haunch, alt. warrior seems to have them, and that's first in set

Reups any better? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Also I'm not going to be able to work on it till tomorrow morning (UTC time) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

The shading seems blotchy, for a lack of a better word. It seems to be darker in places and non-existent where it should be (for example the legs). It's also overblurred in places.

Reupsss <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Can you darken the shading on the forelegs please. 13:00, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the inside hind leg. Your doing great! ^^

13:57, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

Can you define the shading depth on all the legs? I think the stripes on the face need to be connected to the eyes too. Might be my eyes, but there appears to be leaky shading on the back. On the hind leg closest to us, maybe move the white so it's against the line art of the haunch? it looks a little off in the middle like it is. It also appears less soft on the warrior. You've done a great job on this so far!!

21:23, January 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups :) <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat

The base looks a bit too light, could you darken it a bit? Sharpen the white too.

01:03, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit to match the roughness the ones on the other images have, if you would

On the front paws, the white doesn't match the placement portrayed on the star, and it's leaking a bit. —​​​

Reups --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 08:16, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the white a bit more? might be my eyes, but it looks like it hasn't changed at all.

16:44, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, any specific places it should be sharpened? --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 20:26, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

For reference. The red is where the white should be on the paw if you're following the star's pattern of having white underarms, blue is where the white is leaking, and green is where the white needs to be sharpened. —​​​​​​​​​​

Ok, thanks! --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 10:50, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups yep yep :) --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 12:35, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

We should hardly be able to see white on the shoulder looking at the other alts, and there's too much white on <- side of the haunch. you're getting there! <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 14:57, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --<font face="Tempus Sans ITC">CloudymoonTheCat 16:12, January 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the hind paw furthest from us? 13:17, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do it when my brother will give me the computer --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 20:23, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded--<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 09:20, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 04:51, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the stripes should be sharpened, and the shading on the -> front leg should be defined. There should be shading on the face and remove some of the shading on all the paws so they don't look so gray.

Reups --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 11:48, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

The blob of white on the hindleg closest to us looks off and I believe still that the shoulder white should be lessened to just barely be visible upon looking at her other two TUG alts. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 17:30, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

I don't understand what you mean about the hind leg... Should I sharpen the white or remove it? --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 19:34, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Remove. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 19:59, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the > back white paw, as well

Reups There you go --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat 11:40, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define it again? It still looks very flat

Reups I accidently thought you meant the back paw farthest from us before... --<font color="#bc1d64" face="Segoe Script" >CloudymoonTheCat  16:25, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Tortoiseshell queen (RC, OS-1) ~ For Approval
First time doing a tortoiseshell. I tried.

23:21, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good, are torties suppose to have white if they aren't cited on it? Also can you define the shading. 23:23, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm this needs to have more patches. Tortoiseshells have a lot of patterns, you can choose which one you want.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:58, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

Mink's right. She's cited as a tortoiseshell so no white. And the tortoiseshell pattern is honestly Thunder's choice...they can add more when they remove the white. Add some shading to <-- side of the face and smooth out all the shading, too. 00:01, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the front legs. Waste beside the <- front leg

Blur the patches and there's waste outside <-- this front leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:24, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

easiest way to get around the dumb no white thing is to just make it cream or something if you don't want to get rid of it. 09:23, January 18, 2019 (UTC)'

Darken the patches that are supposed to be black, they look dark gray at the moment. 14:24, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry fellas 18:23, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

I can't really see the shading at all. Can you darken and define it everywhere? 18:52, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? 19:15, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front leg closest to us. 20:07, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:40, January 18, 2019 (UTC)

There's this light gray patch on --> this hind leg and define the shading s'more.Potato&#61;) (talk) 01:15, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste floating around the > back leg and > front leg

Could you blend the patches in with the base more? (either by smudging or blurring, whichever floats your boat)

Reuploaded 03:39, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Random gray patch on said hind leg in previous comment is still there.Potato&#61;) (talk) 04:34, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:46, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the patches and define and smooth the shading all over. Also, maybe add a patch on the head so it does not look plain in comparison to the rest of the body. 14:41, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ---> ear? 18:00, January 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's still some waste kinda noodling around. If you're using GIMP I'd probably recommend filling the backdrop of the lineart layer with some random color, color selecting that, then erasing on each layer with a huge brush. That should catch all of it at once

I don't see any wastePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:47, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

I just highlighted each pixel that had it, but I can provide individual screenshots for each bit if necessary. It's definitely there.

just checked, there is defintely some by the --> front paw and base of the tail. 01:55, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Think I got it all. 05:50, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading depth everywhere.

Add depth to the eyes. 15:39, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:09, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

There appears to be some missing shading on the chest? Where the orange patch appears to be brighter. Also, could you add more depth to the shading on the stomach?

Reuploaded 19:47, January 22, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the <-- foreleg. It seems the shading covers most of that and I can't really see the light. 10:18, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Leader Blanks - For Approval
Uploading on my personal for now since its easier to work with. I plan on fluffing up the longhaired tail...which as I look at my cats the tails are slightly too long and I'll fix that next upload as well. <span style="">16:54 Sun Jan 20 2019

Cool! Can you shrink the ears by the smallest amount and make em more pointy? I love this BreezeyPotato&#61;) (talk) 17:46, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add whiskers? :) 18:14, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'd think Breezey would add the whiskers once everything else is all said and done, mainly because that seems like the least important thing, compared to making sure the anatomy and whatnot (read: floof) is correct. =P ​​​​​​​

The shorthair's tail is a bit lumpy, could you make it more consistent in width? It's mostly where the tail curls Eggheart (talk) 22:07, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

I think the tails could be shortened a tad, it might be just me but they seem pretty long. 22:12, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

im gonna be the one who says it fluff those longhair tails up lul 22:19, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the lineart around the eyes more even? 22:20, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the lineart on the longhair's chest furPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:44, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Make the eyes a bit rounder. 03:12, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

Paws look big for the legs, and make the jaws evenPotato&#61;) (talk) 02:57, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Paws look fine to me Malina457 (talk) 17:43, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

The ears look a bit big for a “standard” kitty. Maybe shrink them a wee bit. Seems more like an oriental build when looking at those ears anatomy wise. ​​​​​ <span style="">21:24, 01/23/2019

Please read comments before and my own before commenting. <span style="">2:07 Thu Jan 24 2019

I'm not 100% sure that was necessary, Breezey. There's a lot of comments on this and it's possible other comments hadn't been seen. ​​​​​

Oop didnt see the ear comment before mine. But taking a second look, the faces (at least on the shorthair) cpuld be rounded out a tiny bit more ​​​ <span style="">17:54, 01/24/2019

Forest Of Secrets Minor Rogue 3 - For Approval
Second tabby and first rogue let's see how it goes <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:39, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could ylu possibly define your light source? I'm finding it a bit hard to see, it could just be the lighting on my phone if not. 10:21, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the light source fine. Could you define the shading depth a little on the paler part of the tail?

13:46, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

I kinda agree with Minkclaw, particularly on the legs. It's hard for be to distinguish the shading there, but it could just be the pale parts. 13:52, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Is this any better? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 17:52, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

I’m still having a bit of trouble seeing the shading on the pale part of the tail and the paws, could you darken it there?

Tigerstar (TPB) (Alt. DF) ~ For Approval
Comments? 04:07, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the white?

Can you taper the scars just a bit more? 13:12, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the paw pad color and it doesn't appear his mouth is filled inPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:45, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

The paw pad color looks fine to me, I can see it. 04:31, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:38, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the nosePotato&#61;) (talk) 00:28, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

...There's nothing to fill in. 00:36, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

The nose looks fine imo 00:51, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

I actually concur with Potato; there's a little 1x1x1 pixel where the nose is, and it appears white. 04:07, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the white belly could be smoothed a bit more imo, still sharpish

Pebbleshine (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    06:36, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

could you smooth the shading and define the light on the legs? 06:51, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:05, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define the eye depth. —​

Reups --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:23, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

I know this is probably picky but shouldn't the eyes at least match the shade of her eyes in her star image? 07:24, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

It's not picky Mink, I'll fix it. --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:29, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reups i like it --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:31, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

I know fleck placement is artist's choice, but can you add some more to the <--- elbow? The lack of white flecks compared to the rest of the image is really off putting. 13:11, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps expand some of the shading on the flank up to the shoulder and smooth it a bit?

17:43, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Boyy she looks like a brown oreo --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    07:12, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Mind lightening the shading overall?

Reups Yepppp --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    09:15, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading where it meets her shoulder a bit.

15:27, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also define the shading depth? I don't see any gradience. 04:10, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

@Vec, could you describe it in a easier way? I dont understand. --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    04:41, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups--<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    04:44, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

What Vec meant was that you should add a darker, thinner layer of shading in places where there would be less light.

Reups idk --<span style="" title="No need to rush, my pace"> Silverfur's   <span style="" title="Don’t compare">  starry   <span style="" title="It’s alright to go slowly">  paws    <span style="" title="Go on your own path, my lane">  ~    12:40, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (ToEH alt2) ~ CBA
21:57, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Gorgeous, Patch. Can you define the shading on the ear closest to us just a bit more? 22:15, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you! I also removed an extra layer of shading, think it looks better now.23:39, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe soften the shading on the tail? It makes it look more spiky than fluffy right now.

Re-uploaded. Better?04:08, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be softened overall more

Given the source, there’d probably be a tad more shading on the topside of the most visible front arm, and a bit less on the bottomside

Adding on to my previous comment I'd say the shading's opacity could be lowered

the shoulder looks a little flat with the shading the way it is– mind expanding it around that area?

Re-uploaded.15:18, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

The shoulder lineart is missing for some reason? 15:42, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:23, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

this is bae, man. CBA?

Silverflame (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
^^ Malina457 (talk) 23:02, January 24, 2019 (UTC)malina

Smooth out the shading, and remove some from the chest. Based on your lightsource, there would be some light there. 23:30, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 23:34, January 24, 2019 (UTC)malina

Fill in the nose, and this may just be me but the pupils are making her look a little scary (no offense)Potato&#61;) (talk) 00:15, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Her nose is filled in? Malina457 (talk) 00:42, January 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Ehh my apoligies, noticed just now it was filled in lolPotato&#61;) (talk) 01:05, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

The pupils seem fine to me, other artists have used that same style. 01:52, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Hate to be that person but I have to agree with Potato. The nose colour blends in too well eith the white and the shading. Could you darken it? —​​

Smooth out the shading

@ fox where specifically, @ breezey, it's the same color as the earpink and i'd hate to change it, but I might Malina457 (talk) 03:21, January 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reups for nose Malina457 (talk) 03:24, January 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups Malina457 (talk) 05:13, January 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Light source still isn't consistent. Here's a ref for it. —​​​​​​

I was told it was fine? No offense, I think it's accurate the way it is tbh Malina457 (talk) 05:34, January 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Okay, I'm saying I dont think it's fine. Do what you like but don't use someone else's opinion to override a critique. —​​​​​

Smooth it out everywhere. And I honestly don't see a problem with the light source, other than that some shading should be added on the face (bottom chin area).

Does it still need to be smoothed, I redid the entire shading and got critique on it Malina457 (talk) 14:53, January 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

I would go ahead and smooth it, particularly on the flank and tail. 15:17, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

My apologies @echo. I'll be able to reup later Malina457 (talk) 15:18, January 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

There's some waste outside <-- this leg, I can send a screenie if neededPotato&#61;) (talk) 04:07, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 04:22, January 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

The shading still looks hard edged on the tail.

Could you also define the shading depth? 15:04, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed on the > front leg, < front paw, and this section of the flank just behind the elbow

reups I might withdraw, I cant get it any smoother and I like the way it is just fine Malina457 (talk) 15:50, January 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups Nah, i love this image too much Malina457 (talk) 15:54, January 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

There's some waste outside <-- this paw, near the toesPotato&#61;) (talk) 17:00, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 17:45, January 26, 2019 (UTC)Malina

There's no shading? You might have accidentally hidden that layer. 17:55, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (Alt. MC) ~ For Approval
I'm really bad at black cats lmao

00:52, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Nonsense, this is nice. (Black cats are the best). Define the shading Malina457 (talk) 01:05, January 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Define texturePotato&#61;) (talk) 01:06, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Texture is not mandatory.

Awkward Fox, but I already knew that (I have a habit of reading PCA archives). When I looked at the image I see texture, but if that's the shading excuse me I'm dumbPotato&#61;) (talk) 22:58, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

? The artist is free to have their texture in any style they want (provided they don't have an image to match), or not have it at all. I don't get why they need to "define texture".

I don't even think it's texture. It's most likely just the shading style Ari has always used. 04:00, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color a couple shades? Most of the image is barely a shade off from lineart color, so it's really hard to see what's happening in it. On a similar note, maybe either add highlights or brighten the base quite a bit more so that the shading can be darkened without making it become pure black?

can you define the shading? the cat looks a lil flat 10:49, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

15:12, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry, but could you define the shading on the leaves? 17:57, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:02, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (Alt Q) - For Approval
Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 02:37, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Earpink is two-toned in -> this ear, make it one color and define shading on legs and facePotato&#61;) (talk) 03:28, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smoothen the shading and define eye depth? 04:35, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

All ginger, whether it be in patch form or all over the pelt, should have stripes^^

Pale coated tabby (Ro) ~ For Approval
The stripes were a lot of fun on this one! Eggheart (talk) 02:47, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the tail-tip? Looks almost gray. That could just be me, though. -- We can't always fight nature. We can't fight change.  We can't fight gravity, we can't fight nothin'. My whole life, all I ever did was fight.  03:18, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry Storm, but I disagree. The shading could use some depthPotato&#61;) (talk) 03:21, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

This is great! Could you define shading all over the body except for tail and legs? <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 04:01, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front legs and define earpink as well. I can't really see it. 04:36, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

reup Eggheart (talk) 23:53, January 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading morePotato&#61;) (talk) 04:08, January 26, 2019 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, though some could be added under the chin.

Maybe add a small smidge on the base of the chest as well, Love the pattern c:

Silverstream (Star Alt 3) ~ For approval
For her coloured appearance in the Graystripe mangas. I'm going to lose my mind. —

Reuploaded fixed eyes —

Define the shading everywhere, especially on the chest. With your source there should be more shading on the right side of the chest

Dawn of the Clans Mottled brown and white rogue ~ For Approval
another OC image

the ragged fur.. I'll remove that in the next upload.

Re-uploaded and made changes to the ear pink and shading depth

That's the longest header i've ever seen for an image. Where's the light source coming from? The tail looks like it's lit from the bottom (though it's kind of hard to tell), which doesn't make sense with the rest of the body shading.

Re-uploaded had a feeling something was off about that tail. The source was coming from ->. Is this better?

Define the shading on the face and ears in particular? I'm in love with this pattern <3 15:06, January 26, 2019 (UTC)