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Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feet shading still needs to be darkened. 00:26 Tue Nov 15

Oh, and she needs a torn ear as well. 00:34 Tue Nov 15

One thing, with highlights I just really can't use them without having bad shading. I will try to blur the shading, but I hope everyone can understand that highlights are bad for the chararts I make. 03:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I guess it's better now...

Make the ear nick a little thicker. 05:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The paws still need to be darkened. Just to clarify, right now they're lighter than the rest of the legs and that makes pretty much no sense with the current light source (or what appears to be the current light source). They need to match the colour at the top of the legs if not be darker than that. 04:50 Wed Nov 16

Reuploaded. 01:31, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. 08:05, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is a bad charart.. I darkened the shading. 05:21, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Archeye (W) - Tweaked
I dont know if its redone or tweaked, I redoned stripes and shadings.. OA was Insaneular.. Leaf-storm,14:11,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Ups, changes arent showing Leaf-storm,14:13,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Why is the lineart in between his haunch and his tail gone? 16:08, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That's the old version. 16:21, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

i dont like when changes arent showing Leaf-storm,16:48,November 13,2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list, but could you make the ear-pink less purple. 22:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was on the list Leaf-storm,12:57,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Reupladed, late, sorry I wasn't on my computer before Leaf-storm,13:38,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and shading. 00:21 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded, 15:15,November 15,2011 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be darker, and darken the highlights/shading on the haunch or brighten the highlights/lighten the shading on the shoulder. Blur the stripes as well. 04:52 Wed Nov 16

Also dull the earpink a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:39, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste in the triangle where the haunch and the paws are separated. Also, near the front paws. 21:34, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,10:12,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more red than purple, and sharpen the edges of the stripes by smudging them. 23:59 Fri Nov 18

Changes arent showing ,7:07,November 19,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the front paws. 22:02, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) - Tweaked
Blurred shadings and added some more, OA is Bramble Leaf-storm,14:53,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the shading on her paws. 16:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:30,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the neck shading and lighten the shading on the middle of the haunch. Blur all shading. 22:59 Sun Nov 13

Next comment will be blur the shadings more yes? I do it..but I dont have much time now Leaf-storm,13:46,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload the image? Also, try to match the shading to this tutorial about shading 'cause right now the shading doesn't make much sense. 00:18 Tue Nov 15

I make it tomorrow because on this computer I have hight brightness and I cant see the shadings correctly. 19:58,November 15,2011 (UTC)

Free time! Yes! It looks really bad, sorry 10:23,November 17,2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the stomach to match the haunch shading closer. 00:00 Sat Nov 19

Lighten up the shading oon the paws. Trollsky  She who Trolls everything 07:49, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, forget paw..I made it later..busy now 8:05,November 19,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 9:12,November 19,2011 (UTC)

Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
Added longer tail. Original artist was Sandy, redone by Scarlet. Comments? Elorisa  18:24, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks a little odd... When I added it to the list, I pictured it being expanded at the middle, so that it was roughly the same shape, but longer. Make sense? 18:28, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded; Better? ''' Elorisa   18:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, perfect :) 18:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip of the tail a bit pointier and erase the waste around the tail. 22:45 Sun Nov 13

Are you still working on this, Elorisa? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:06, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

If she's not going to work on it, I'll glady take over. I love playing with the lineart on images. =) 08:09, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on it, I just haven't gotten around to reuploading it. I'll have it uploaded either later today or tommorow. -- Elorisa   20:10, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded... -- Elorisa   16:07, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip pointier and the line on the tail closest to the back a bit smoother, it's a bit jagged right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:25, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (E) - Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Spottedwing, then I'm guessing Nightfall101 tweaked it. Comments? 20:41, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, if any. 21:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink, please. :3 Awesome! 02:09, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink larger and more triangular. 00:08 Thu Nov 17

Darken the shading - 01:18, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Guardian, the shading doesn't need to be darker. It's fine. Okay, since Snowy sorta left, is anyone else going to work on this, or should we decline it? 17:07, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) - Tweaked
This pretty much looks redone, but I DID tweak it. :P The white was placed in unnatural places, the patches needed to be smudged, and the shading needed to be defined. Ugh, I suck at torties. DX Anyways, OA was -Bracken I think. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:10, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. <span style="">00:11 Thu Nov 17

It doesnt need defining, just the highlight or unshaded part. - 03:09, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:47, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
I'm the OA, and I felt I could have done much better with the stripes than I originally did. I got permission from Scarlet to do this. Comments? 05:25, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is much better. xD Define the ear pink - I'm having trouble seeing it. 05:29, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:51, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add grey paws, since he was described with them? 21:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Different book, different rank. I believe he was either a kit or an apprentice at that point. 21:20, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Since we don't know, maybe add a TINT of gray? This is awesome! 22:08, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

The grey paws were in Eclipse I think, and as a kit. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:46, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that was the book he became an apprentice. He definitely wasn't a warrior at that point. 00:14, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes just a little. 02:05, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Rainsplash (D) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading to make it darker. OA was Sandy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 16:59, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blu rthe ear pink a bit. <span style="">22:10 Thu Nov 17

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 93.97.191.4 18:25, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I might end up redoing this... Another layer of shading isn't really cutting it. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:01, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud (E)- Tweaked
Shading tweak. OA is Sandstar12.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 21:29, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <span style="">22:13 Thu Nov 17

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 22:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading. 12:28, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 07:47, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was hollyberry; redone to be reddish brown. I took all colors from Oakheart, so I am not changing any colors. 00:11, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does the red part of his description mean that he needs stripes? :\ 00:13, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

He's red-brown, which is the same as reddish brown. Oakheart and Pinestar are reddish browna nd they don't need stripes, so I'm not adding stripes. 00:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 02:38, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks the taddest bit blotchy by where the haunch meets the foreleg. 03:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

You may not be changing any colors, but that ear pink needs to be blurred. Misty, this looks much better then the original version. 08:03, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading along his back. 93.97.191.4 18:27, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Derp. Forgot to log-in. 18:29, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W)- Redone
Redone. there was multiple issues, Permission from Scarlet. Looked funny when I tried to tweak. Please don't kill me. Oa is Bramble.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 02:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. <3 Define the shading on the tail a little. I'm jealous. 03:36, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add some shading in the midriff area, so the shading isn't just a straight line? Puurdy :D 21:19, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No. No purdy, or jealousness. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 01:20, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well too bad, cause this is beast BD define the shading on the tail - 06:12, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 06:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (W) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be redone, and I accidently erased the earpink so I had to do that along with the shading.. Sorry. Dx OA was Icecloud33. Oh, and according to the new rule do I have to do her kit image along with this one? M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:20, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the shoulder highlight more circular. 21:12, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And lighten the earpink a tad. 21:18, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And no, you don't have to do her kit if you just tweaked the shading on this one. It's only if it's a major change. You're more than welcome to reserve it, though. 03:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, thanks for telling me. ^-^ Hopefully I blurred the shading enough, and I brightened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   03:26, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit more and thicken it on the shoulder a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:51, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is working, I'm new to GIMP... M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:13, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot about the waste.. >.< M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:17, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (W) - Redone
Iceheart's was declined, so I think I'm fine to put this up. OA was Night shine. And her stripes were unnatural and she needed to be brown. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:39, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

You never fail to please. Darken the shading near the base of the tail just a tad. 02:49, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

She should probably stay short haired. I know you're going to be redoing all of the images, but it feels to me like we have an abundance of long haired characters. 02:52, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, I was hoping nobody would notice I made her long haired. XD I prefer those blanks personally, Alright, I'll lay the shorthaired lineart over the top. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:06, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlight/unshaded tail part and make the whole image paler (you don't have to do that, just a suggestion) - 06:10, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay, done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:48, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing (Insanley jealous XD)! Can you enlarge and blur the ear-pink a tad. 13:49, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beechstar (L) - Tweaked
I just burned it to make it darker and tweaked the eyes 'cause they didn't make sense to me XD <span style="">03:16 Sat Nov 19

OA was Echomist <span style="">03:17 Sat Nov 19

Wow, that was fast :D Perhaps just a little darker? 03:18, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hey, I all I had to do was burn it XD <span style="">03:24 Sat Nov 19

The little strip of fur between the front legs seems odd as in there's no shading or it doesn't match the rest of the pelt. Perhaps darken that little section there. Awesome! 04:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (D) - Tweaked
Needed tuft ears, original artist was Icestorm and I'm tweaking it again. Dx 04:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ears look more like Tawnyspots or Redtail. They look kind of odd right now. 16:57, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done :3 22:10, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Cloversplash (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Mousetalon and shading needed to be tweaked. :3 04:36, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Are the eyes colored in? They don't look like it. If they are, make them stand out from the pelt more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:33, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Heh, woops! 15:43, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white marking on her nose. 21:33, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.' 22:10, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA was Evanphoto. I "redid" it in a sense, but everything was on the same image. You look at the other image, and explain to me how I'm supposed to work with that. The shading was awkward and hard to blur, the ear pink was bad, there was blurred lineart, the eye didn't have depth to it....and some of the lineart was also miscolored. 05:48, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

LOL, looks like I did a bad job :P As for the image, I juggest puting highlights. --Evanphoto 12:09, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are NOT necessary Evanphoto. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  13:12, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Skye. Could you just blur the middle of the scar a bit? 13:28, November 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Evanphoto, I do not use highlights on my images, and I never will. 14:15, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (W) ~ Tweaked
Darkened the shading, and that's all I'm doing to this image. I don't know who the OA of this image is, because the file doesn't say. I don't know if it's Sandy or not... But, the one who made the version I'm tweaking now is Icestorm. 05:57, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

The OA was Goldencloud. and it kinda looks the whole thing is darkened, darken/ define the shading. - 06:09, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bloo. Re-uploaded. 06:16, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think I remember her page saying that she has white paws. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:15, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

I checked, and it said grey and white paws. Make the earpink triangular. 21:32, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine, Moonleaf. If it wasn't, it would have been put on the tweak list for it. 02:53, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Palefoot (W) - Redone
I got permission from Scarletwind to redo this, since it was near impossible to change the shading without layers. OA was Rainbreath. 03:23, November 20, 2011 (UTC)