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Hawkheart (Star) ~ For Approval
I've never done flecks/mottles before.. so critique is kinda needed on that. Color picked from his Medicine cat image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:54, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't you already have an image up? Neverendingmoon (talk) 23:08, May 23, 2014 (UTC)Moony

If you look in the comments for Whiteclaw's, I withdrew so i could work on this one instead.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:11, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Add some earpink, define the light on his legs and tail, and make the flecks and mottles match his other images more. I'd recommend asking the OA of one of them for the file, so you can get the right colours exactly and study the pattern properly. Also, this needs to be named 'Hawkheart.star.png'. 23:14, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Re-Up.  Added highlights to his tail and legs, and i changed his mottles. Does that look better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:07, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think you should define the shading a bit more. Think about where your light is coming from. Is it coming toward him from the top left corner above the hip and tail? Then shade along the right edge of the face (our right) and the tops of the front legs, and the right of the chest and the bottom of the belly. If it's coming from the top right corner above his head, shade the left side of the face, the bottom of the front legs, shade a little on the left side of the chest, shade a lot on the lower left side of the back, and the tail. Just think about where the light is coming from and where the shadows would fall on Hawkheart's frame. Jayfrost-Of-RiverClan (talk) 01:57, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-Up. '''Does that look any better? I couldnt make it to dark, because it was starting to make his mottles blur a bit..~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:20, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and face shading some. 15:32, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up.  Added darker shading. I'd rather not define the ear pick anymore so it still matches his other images, since i color-picked it from his Medicine cat image.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:50, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define means to make it more visible, by whichever means you wish. It doesn't always mean changing the color. It honestly just means make it so we can see it- perhaps changing the lighting in the ears, shifting the style, ect.

'''Re-Up. '''Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 19:04, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and define the light source 05:55, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-Up. '''Smudged ear pink and difined the light source.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:03, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light/shading on the tail? Beautiful image, Breeze! 16:51, 05/26/2014

Re-up.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:49, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you make the grey more visible?

Define your light on the paw closest to us, maybe? And smooth out the shading in the top of the closest ear a bit, it looks a bit blotchy (might not be the right word I'm using) 17:35, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. added more gray mottles and smoothed out the shading a bit.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:05, May 28, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is swallowing the tail. Lighten the shading on the tail, and define the mottles on the tail as well. The light on the tail could also use some defining. 00:10, 05/29/2014

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:05, May 29, 2014 (UTC)

The mottles need a lot ore defining on the tail. It looks solid, tbh. 21:38, 06/2/2014

Re-up. Defined the mottles and shading on his tail. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:51, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere - it looks a bit flat. 22:03, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I didnt want too make it too dark, since it makes his mottles blur alot.. same with the highlights. But i added more shading too it, so please don't complain that his mottles are blurring. :/--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:51, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink some more. 20:52, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:10, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

So sorry for the long period of time without comments, but sharpen the mottles. 18:28, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I finally installed gimp again, so hopefully that looks better now that i can use the smudge tool. Sharpened the mottles and tweaked with the shading a tiny bit.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:04, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading/highlights on the tail.

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:27, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Fircone (alt Ro) ~CBA
I honestly don't think that mottled is my thing. Comments? 17:44 Sat May 31

Define the shading, its barely visible. Also, try blurring/smudging the mottles a little bit.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:56, May 31, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think both are fine, but if someone else agrees, I'll change it. 0:42 Sun Jun 1

I agree with both. 13:58, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading everywhere except the belly + back could be defined, but the mottles look fine. 23:41, June 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 0:43 Mon Jun 2

i think the mottles could be blurred a tad 06:45, June 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:38 Mon Jun 2

Define the shading a bit and perhaps smudge the white specks a tiiiiiiinnnyyy bit? 21:29, 06/2/2014

I think the shading is fine, although I don't think the changes for the new image are showing. Click here for a free muffin and coffee 0:44 Tue Jun 3

yeah can you define the shading more, the different colors just make it harder to see 00:10, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:34 Fri Jun 6

CBA? 22:08, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks super black- lighten it a bit, and if you can't distinguish it form the rest of the body, give it a faint navy tint or something. That should usually do the trick. 03:33, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:42 Mon Jun 9

Define the leg shading.

Re-uploaded. 20:40 Wed Jun 11

CBA?

Windflight (Star) ~ CBA
The images' tails don't match, so I used the elder's. Comments? wish me luck 18:29, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

On the --> paw, the stripes go across the fingerclawthingy paw segments weirdly on the back higher up one. I hope that made sense. Good luck! Brick 20:23, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, unless someone disagrees, since the stripes are supposed to be in that similar manner. Also, try to use better phrasing next time, dear, since I barely managed to understand what you said ^^;; 21:21, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

re-up I did fiddle around with him a bit, though, to make him match others a bit more. 23:03, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

and if anyone wants to see the changes 20:46, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define/darken the chest shading.

re-up did some other minor stuff too 23:01, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-up more stuffs done 23:39, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? 16:37, 06/8/2014

re-up 22:07, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Whiteclaw (Star) - For Approval
My first StarClan charart. Comments? Brick 20:18, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Edity-boop. Showing a version by another member, the pic I made is here http://i59.tinypic.com/25070yc.png Brick  20:19, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, fixed some issue I had with lighting on the face. Link is http://i60.tinypic.com/350kto4.png Brick  06:48, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Whiten the paw some - it's looking gray. 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, hope this is better! http://i62.tinypic.com/110xaiu.png Brick  21:06, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink some - it looks a bit too bright. Also, try using pure white for that paw - maybe it'll make it look whiter. 00:10, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, I accidently uploaded an old file instead of the newer version, fixed version issss here --> http://i57.tinypic.com/w1xt9j.png Brick  13:38, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, especially on the white paw. 17:02 Sun Jun 8

Re-ups, linky is http://i62.tinypic.com/16kysk.png. is it just me or does he look a bit like a plastic toy with his expression and overall look? Brick  16:55, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, especially on the white paw.

Cinderfur (Star) - For Evaluation


Hey so I saw that Cinderfur was on the list for characters needing art, and I'm all like WOO I LOVE THIS GUY. So, here you go. shading i'm so sorry    20:42, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 20:44, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Erm... this isn't the file I uploaded. Wikia, what the heck?!?! 20:45, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the thumbnail of the one you uploaded on the recent photos bar. Define the eye depth and chest shading. Brick 20:50, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups (hopefully Dang it Wikia!)  uggg shading me no likey 20:55, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

If it still isn't showing for you (as it seems to be doing for me), I'd reccomend uploading it to an image sharing site like tinypic or Photobucket. Brick 16:45, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Do not use photobucket. That stores the images in albums and things like that. Tinypic is good, and I also think ezimba is a good one.

Still working? 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

I'd like to be, but I've got finals. I'll try to have the chnges uploaded in the next 2-4 days. I get out of school early on Wednesday and Thursday, so I'll have time then, if that's okay? 21:38, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

/ Reups! 18:08, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart.

Oakheart (Alt W 2) ~ For Approval
(it's the fox-coloured alt, it was agreed months ago) Ah, I remember withdrawing this so long ago :p glad I could get back to it. 21:16, June 4, 2014 (UTC)

Make the ear more pink, it looks quite beige. oh my starclan i love that texture      Brick  14:58, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Ear pink looks fine to me.

Hmm, maybe try making the tail texture go with the fur more? As in, make it curve more with the tail. Nice job, dear. 00:12, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Reups gracias~ here's changes 18:30, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Could I get a comment, hm? 17:36, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Add more depth to his ears and eyes. Also, darken the shading a tad.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:56, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not touch the ears or the shading, especially not the ears. And I think the eyes are fine. 14:20, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, and blur it on the body a bit.

Reups changes 19:21, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Russetfur (Lo) - For Approval
Dazzy's reservation ran out so this is mine now. All colors are from Russet's starclan image 01:09, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Her stripes look a little thinner than on her other images, can you make them slightly thicker please? Brick 14:55, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Looks alright to me 20:42, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Her stripes kinda fade into the shading. I'm not sure how to explain how to fix it but I'm sure you know how. Sorry for not being able to be specific ;-; 16:34, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded 03:44, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on all four legs, and I think this'll be good. Scarlet x Russterfur otp

Poppyfrost(Q) - For Approval
changes this was fun c: 21:27, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Why does it look like she has stripes on her? o.o She needs to be dappled and if you have them, I'm having a rough time seeing them. Also blur the transitions between colors, and blur the shading on the white a lot. At the same time, define the shading on the non-white.

Re-uploaded whoops I though those were stripes when I was going off of the kit lol 22:07, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Changes 00:10, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples just a littttleee bit more? <span style="">15:08, 06/7/2014

Re-uploaded 15:53, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add depth- lighten it a bit on her legs and stuff. It'll be lighter in some areas than others. 20:29, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:56, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white.

smudge around the patches a little bit more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:56, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not going to smudge the patches more because the other images don't have it and It was just a small thing I added but i did blur the shading more. c: 02:27, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Molepaw (NP) (Kit) - CBA
Hmm...not bad, for my first. I think I did a pretty good job. Critique is apprectiated. 22:30, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

omg so cute good job I think you should lighten the shading near the paws a little bit. <span style="">21:05 Fri Jun 6

Re-uploaded, changes here ---> http://www.ezimba.com/work/140607C/ezimba11121565737900.png if not showing. 21:51, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey just slightly? Then i think itll be good for CBA 05:03, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

I'd smudge where the grey meets the black on the paws, too. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:09, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. http://www.ezimba.com/work/140610C/ezimba11121599713900.png Changes refuse to show. ;-; Lightened the gray a bit and smudged it some. 20:16, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 20:47, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Whitetail (Q) ~ For Approval
due to the light source of course she'll look a little gray. Comments? 22:35, June 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you please give a link to the changes? <span style="">16:29, 06/8/2014

I see the changes, but here ya go! 22:02, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading, or something? Make it less grey? I know it would look grey, but this looks more grey than it does white. 22:07, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, since 1) Shading darkness is artist's choice, and 2) there's no way I can do that without making her shading look flat, sadly, since most of this light source's shading would make a good portion of the body shaded. 22:10, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

It may be artist's choice, but there's a difference between that and being asked to lighten it so we can /tell/ it's a white cat. I agree with Shoon. While it may be the source, it's still very hard to tell aside from the blindingly white highlights.

re-up i tried 22:37, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

A suggestion I can give if your having issues shading white cats is you can always use tinted shading, like a blue color or something, on white cats. <span style="">23:18 Sun Jun 8

Thing is, she wouldn't match her other images with the tint, so I'm using the gray tint. 23:25, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Tint doesn't have to matter between images. If tint totally makes it look super different, maybe your shading is blurred too much/too thick, but since it's just defining where joints and stuff would be on the body it shouldn't matter. 03:31, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

re-up all i did was make it blue-ish o3o 18:19, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

re-up beebs was so lame, she forgot the earpink 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

re-up i usually smudge but okay! 20:29, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the frontmost leg ( this one because i suck at explaining ) and I think this should be pretty good to go, dear.

Quince (Q) - For Approval
I stole (not stole lmao since it's mine) the collar for Velvet, since both she and Quince are supposed to have the same style collar for the kittypet and queen images. Changes are here just in case.

Uh, it might be just me, but the picture file is normal lineart, but this looks thinner? o.o <span style="">21:38 Fri Jun 6

It's the changes. They're not showing on Wikia (but they are for me, actually), hence why I linked it.

Blur the belly shading a bit? <span style="">16:25, 06/8/2014

Re-uploaded.

Blur the shading a little and add some more depth to it- add areas where the shading's much darker, and areas where it'd remain lighter. Also make sure all of the shading stays on the lineart, because it's beginning to leak away around her belly. 20:27, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the shading and I really don't like this lmao.

Smudge the shading a little bit more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:57, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

I don't smudge my shading.

Uh, then blur it then? it just looks a bit sharp on the edges.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:52, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I prefer harder-edged shading over overly-blurred shading.

Tangleburr (Kit) - For Approval
First charart since joining again. Comments? <span style="">21:19 Fri Jun 6

I'm sorry but since you reserved after posting this, it may have to be declined... I may be wrong, though, so don't shoot me if I am. 21:30, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

-Shrug- Oh well. My chararts aren't good anyway ;~; <span style="">21:31 Fri Jun 6

Nah, it was only a couple minutes, as seen here, and sometimes it takes that long to post an edit somewhere. I think Cloud should be allowed to keep the image. I'd have no complaints. Some people forget the dates at first too and we let them slide.

Okie, just had to check~ ask Berry for the file of one of the other images, I believe Berry did those ones, so that you can get the colours precise; it looks a little lighter than the warrior, but it could just be my kindle. Define your shading and texture too. Don't you say that your chararts aren't good, Whisker; honestly, this is great, for your first in a long time! 21:49, June 6, 2014 (UTC)

I asked her, now I have to wait xD thanks sorrel   <span style="">22:01 Fri Jun 6

Re-up. Shading is a bit better, I think. Also defined texture. <span style="">22:24 Fri Jun 6

Define the texture a bit more? <span style="">21:37, 06/7/2014

Re-up. Also defined texture on patches. <span style="">23:01 Sat Jun 7

Sharpen and thin out the shading a lot. 20:26, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

I oculdn't really sharpen it, but re-upload anyway~ <span style="">23:32 Sun Jun 8

Define the shading; it appears a bit flat.

Runningnose (D) - For Approval
i'll just leave this here <span style="">00:30, 06/7/2014

He needs a gray muzzle. 00:34, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

reup <span style="">02:29, 06/7/2014

Add light to the far hind foot bc that wouldn't totally be in shadow unless he's super awkward at sitting. Thicken the rump shading a little more, and add a bit more towards the center of his haunch because cats are skinny and the bones would protrude a little more on an older cat. 20:24, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Tansy(Lo): For Approval
Eee I'm very happy about Fircone uvu! Here's Tansy! http://www.ezimba.com/work/140607C/ezimba18819864628800.png Anais ♥ (talk)   01:40, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading a little, thin it out a touch, and settle on one light source: the shading on the left and face suggest it's coming from the front of the body, but everything else says it's coming from above. Fantastic job though! 20:23, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Brook (KM) - For Approval
changes  <span style="">21:31, 06/7/2014

Define the facial shading juust a bit. 22:20, June 7, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it just fine; I'd rather not touch it unless a few more agree. ^;;; <span style="">15:24, 06/8/2014

Just a tiny bit more. Love those eyes *.* <span style="">19:08 Sun Jun 8

reuploaded <span style="">19:20, 06/8/2014

Lighten the shading a little or tint it navy or something because her whole rear half looks black. 20:19, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the chest shading?

Marmalade (Lo) - For Approval
So, any thoughts? Not sure if I totally matched the stripes. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:20, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Totally forgot to add the tear in his ear. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:29, June 8, 2014 (UTC)

Changed some shading that was bugging me. (sorry I'll stop after this 'til someone comments) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 01:53, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

blur the tail, facial, and neck shading a tad? 05:06, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Did you remember to tear his ear? I can't tell whether it's there Dazzling, sweetie 15:36, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, the ear tear is there, but it's small so it's hard to tell. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:45, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on his tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:59, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the shading a bit, I hope that helped. I wasn't sure what you meant by thicken. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:44, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Nice! Can you blur the shading a tad, and maybe tint the shading red as it kinda looks gray now.

I couldn't find a way to convert the shading I already had to a red-ish color, so I had to lay red shading overtop of the black shading I already had. I hope that didn't mess up the changes I already made too much. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:23, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face just a bit, maybe? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:16, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Leopardstar (Star) ~ For Approval
?? i tried 02:39, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

This is beautiful, wow. Maybe darken her coat a little, it looks a bit darker in her other images. 20:26, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thats amazing. :) Define the scars a little bit and define the ear pink.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 19:32, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Possibly blur the spots on her back pattern a liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittle bit more? Wow. 18:11, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the shading; it seems kinda flat, and can you darken the stripes/spots a tad?

re-uploaded eh i tried 10:16, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a bit pinker, I can't really tell if there's any there. 19:22, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Ottersplash (Q) - For Approval
- meh. All the colors are from her warrior 03:45, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe try tinting her shading just a little bit more on the dark red side? It's starting to really make the ginger look gray-ish. idk what color you used to shade the ginger so if you're already using that kind of color plz ignore me

Define the shading on the face, and get rid of the white background. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:55, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:04, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Put a bit of highlight on her <<< cheek. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:55, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:14, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge where the orange and white meets.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:49, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur it a bit, but not much. She shouldn't smudge it since she has another image to match.

Re-uploaded I don't want to blur the markings much more than this 03:50, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Snowfur (Q) ~ For Approval
Should I tint the shading a more blue-gray? Not sure if it looks gray or not. changes here, if they're not showing; comments? 20:23, June 9, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. It lookd really dark on a white cat~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:49, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 16:56, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading.

Reups 19:25, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Q) - For Approval
My other Queen image finished the CBA period, but it hasn't been approved yet, so I wasn't sure if I was allowed to post this yet. But I wanted to get it up before I went to bed, so I figured I'd try. If not, I'll take it down until my other image is approved. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:26, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Here are the changes, in case they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140610C/ezimba19266766152300.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:27, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

I've approved Dappletail, but next time, please wait until the image is approved and archived. Otherwise, we'll decline it.

I will, I'm sorry. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:06, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:48, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:38, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
-That was annoying to make. But whatever! I probably missed something. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:50, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Make his nose black. If you look at black cats in real life, almost all of them have black noses. Also, add a little more depth to the eyes. Great charart :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:46, June 10, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, in this case, the nose has to match the color of the other images nose colors, which I'm fairly certain it does. 02:55, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

His nose is black on his kit and apprentice.

Yeah okay, so sorry 'bout that. Guess I'm more color blind than thought. 03:00, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks for the compliment, Breeze. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:54, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Here's the colors just in case you couldn't get them right because of my shading. The smokey things are at about 25% opacity, and I used a flecked brush to smudge/place them on the charart. If you want one of the files for direct colors, opacity levels, ect, go ahead and say so and I can fire them your way. =) I shade weirdly lmao

Tom (KP) - For Approval
Hi.

Awesome (much better than mine)! Maybe define the shading a little? I can barely see it. 14:38, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you~

Hmm, maybe make the earpink more red? idk the color just doesn't seem to suit him. Those eyes are fantastic *steals* <span style="">21:41 Wed Jun 11

Re-uploaded. I love the eyes too no stealing.

Featherstorm (Q) ~ For Approval
And I thought this one was going to be easy. I underestimated this image. Comment away~ <span style="">21:41 Wed Jun 11

Define the shading, and maybe darken it slightly. It looks really good though. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 23:43, June 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. <span style="">23:52 Wed Jun 11

Well those are some good looking stripes. Can you blur the shading a tad? owo

Re-uploaded. Merci. <span style="">16:38 Thu Jun 12

Jackdaw's Cry (Star) ~ For Approval
Yay. :3 Comments?

Define/darken the shading, and could you smudge it so that it flows with the fur? Those are some really amazing eyes. <span style="">16:39 Thu Jun 12

Smudging the shading isn't mandatory. =/ Idk what everyone's thing is with smudging but not everyone does it

No, that's not it. I can clearly see that the shading is smudged, so I'm only suggesting that it be smudged in the way of the fur. ;) <span style="">18:07 Thu Jun 12

Add the texture. It's a bit faint, but it is there. 19:12, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay then. It doesn't look smudged to me but whatever. o.O