Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Sasha (KP) - Redone
Original artist was FirePelt, and I just redid it to match the rogue image. Changes aren't showing. 01:21, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make her muzzle and the tip of her tail blend into her pelt more 03:09, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  12:01, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join? Stoneclaw33

Thicken the shading, blur it, and define the ear-pink; maybe brighten it. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 15:33, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head. Looking good, Moonleaf. 17:10, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

My laptop is needing a battery replacement, so I'll edit this when I get it back.  19:08, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Redden and define the earpink. Also, blur the shading on the haunch. 16:18, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add one more stripe on her haunch because the stripes on her hind legs and flank go up almost to her tail base on her rogue charart. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 21:34, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yay, I'm back. 00:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

The Y stripe on the front right leg is more blurred in the middle than the rest of it. 03:21, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Stormfur (W) ~ Tweaked
Shading tweak. Original artist is Honeyfur, I think. 16:01, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Cloudy, you can only have one charart for tweaking and you already have Redstar. This will be declined. Sorry. Scarlet wind Fairy  Tail Mage 16:03, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I've had this one reserved for a while though. I added it while TW was still going! 16:05, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry! There aren't dates in the table. Sorry about that. Scarlet wind Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:06, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Haha. No worries. I just want to get these done. I've had 'em complete for, like, a week and a half now. 16:08, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur this more? SpottedtalonMudears 20:14, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Where's the light source? It seems like the shading and highlights are everywhere... 16:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know where the light source is, honestly. This is still the original image... I'm just tweaking it. 18:09, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did it. I couldn't work with what was there. Every time I would try and fix the shading, it just made it worse. 18:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing so I can keep Mousefur's alt warrior up. 00:00, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart said I could have it back. xD What DOES need to be fixed on here, anyways? I think it looks fine. 01:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading and blur everything and then ill approve this. 02:36, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I ended up just re-doing the shading. 03:10, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make sure that the shading is on the under side of the tail all the way to the tip; it kinda looks like there's a lighter gray tail tip. Maybe also give him a highlight on the forehead instead of shadows? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't use highlights, but it's worth a shot, I guess. 00:57, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

It look bad. >.> Re-uploaded. I don't use highlights because I'm not good with them...ugh... 03:00, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. It looks purplish. 23:49, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I was the original artist xD Blur the tail shading. 00:24, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, you were? Sorry 'bout that, Icey. =( 01:04, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 06:23, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

No hard feelings. Could you blur the shading a tad? 14:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Done. 04:28, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (L) - For Approval
I borrowed all the colors from the original image, which was made by Minnowclaw, and it needed to be long haired. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 23:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! To me, the nose looks a little bright 23:44, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:01, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Her description says she's sleek... <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Fear the pink <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">mist! 01:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, all RiverClan cats except Mistystar are supposed to be long haired. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 14:31, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

If it says shes sleak it probably means she should stay a short hair. Sorry Mint. 19:35, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, a cat can be sleek and have thick fur. Silverstream was described as sleek and thick-furred, and she's going to become a longhair. Mistystar isn't longhaired because she's half ThunderClan and described as sleek. 21:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and she's golden-spotted, not brown-spotted. xD That needs to be tweaked. It says so on CP, page 338. 22:36, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, does this mean all the spots and stripes need to be golden? <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 22:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think so. 23:36, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Iceheart, I know you declined this, but Mistystar has said that it does need to be long-haired, and if not, it should be golden spotted. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:42, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Kay ya keep it. Sorry about the confusion. Im far too suggestable to be a lead XP. 01:53, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the spots above her eyes, they're a bit light and darken the shading under the chin. This is really nice! <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 16:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- thanks. I also reddened the earpink. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:55, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still a bit too bright. Try looking at this: File:Ear pink chart.PNG 21:57, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I don't think its supposed to have a pink nose. ;D 00:18, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I've given her patchy fur, as she's mentioned with it in The Fourth Apprentice. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 01:17, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the ear-pink a more natural color? It's so pink...it doesn't really go with the golden hue of the image. 01:24, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:24, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the ear a bit, to make it look more realistic. 21:54, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it's not too smudged. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 22:03, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Ki) - Redone
The limit is 15, not 10 now, right? Anyways, changes aren't showing yet, but I redid her kit image to look like the rest of hers. I personally think I should lighten the whole thing up a bit, but I'm not sure. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:06, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, lighten it, also add highlight/shading to the tail and front legs. 21:53, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. Not sure if changes are showing yet, ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:33, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the head highlight to match the other highlights. 21:53, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sunspots (Q) - Redone
Since the limit's 15 now, I'll post one. I had to redo her as a longhair. Original artist was Bramble, I believe. 20:09, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Her ginger patces need stripes. But she's pretty. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="5C3B7A" >Fear the pink <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="B392D3">mist! 21:15, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Add stripes, define earpink. Also blur the shading on the chest and tail. 21:54, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Do I really need to add stripes? Cats can have ginger splotches without them. 21:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I guess so, but Brightheart was tweaked to have stripes. 21:58, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Don't think the changes are showing. 22:07, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Did you add stripes? ` 22:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, still aren't showing :P I tried uploading it a few times, but I checked the image history just a couple seconds ago. 22:19, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I see the stripes! Y-type tabby stripes, right? If so, darken them, 22:21, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes probably aren't showing. You'll know when the stripes are dark and noticable XD 00:41, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

lighten the shading and blur it. Good job. 01:23, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I am pretty sure the changes aren't showing. 22:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink lighter and smaller. 21:53, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the shading on the belly. <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 21:52, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:12, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mothflight (MC) ~ Redone
Ugh.. my first attempt at a white cat... Anyway, she needed to be redone as a short hair. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 20:31, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Its pretty good; define the light source though, there's no shading on the tail, and it looks like the shading is coming from both sides of the body. The head highlight should be facing the left. 21:52, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 22:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, its better, but I still can't tell where the light is coming from. Why don't you try copying the shading from when it was a longhair? On that one, you can tell that the light is coming from the side. 207.62.246.62 22:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Bleh, that was me. ;D 22:27, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. 22:40, August 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. I'm starting to really dislike white cats... xP Changes aren't showing up yet. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:19, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dewspots (W) - Redone
Original artist was Echoheart, and she needed to be short-haired. I don't like this that much, but comments? x3 02:41, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice! <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 21:51, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (TC) - Tweaked
I made him more of a sandy gray and made his white flash a bit smaller. I also re-did the shading, added depth to the eye, and fixed the ear-pink. Comments? 14:36, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. And could you make him the least bit more sandy? <font color="green" style="background:turquoise">☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 21:50, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mosspelt (Q)~ Tweaked
Redone to be a long hair, original artist was Nightfall. Comments? 02:51, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice! Make the right front paw darker, and add a little more shading to it. 03:15, August 28, 2011 (UTC)