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=Tweaking=

Timberfur(W) - Tweaked
tweaked for shading oa was splook. 02:38, May 23, 2014 (UTC)

I know this has nothing to do with shading, but can you define the eye depth? 22:02 Fri May 23

Re-uploaded 01:41, May 24, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading, please.

Re-uploaded 21:41, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (W) - Redone
Omigosh, there was sosososososo sosososo sososo many thing wrong with this image. OA was me. 05:06, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading? I can barely see it. 13:38, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:37, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define it more, I'm having a hard time picking it out from the pelt. 14:00, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:01, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light, as the entire image seems like it's in shadow.

Thunder (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA be Icy; should I whiten the paws a little, or/and define their shading? They don't really look white. 16:40, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please whiten those paws a lot.

Reups I also made their shading a bit more visible 16:48, May 25, 2014 (UTC)

Make the white tail tip a little more "longer", so to say, and expand the white chest since I kinda had to do a double take to see if it was still there.

Reups see here for changes 19:15, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Frostfur (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA be me, redid the shading because it was so bad. Comments? 03:03, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the facial shading a bit? 14:01, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, unless someone disagrees, since I think it's defined enough. 14:03, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'll side with Duck on this one, and would perhaps expanding the light on her face be possible as well? If you'd rather not, s'all good with me. ^^

re-up I'd rather not expand the light on her face o3o 21:46, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Wing Shadow Over Water (PH) - Redone
OA is me and so many issuessss and all colors are from her queen.

Can you add possibly a few more specks of mud, even just some small ones, because the tribe cats were noted to have rolled in mud, so it would be in other placer on their fur. 04:23, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That I can do. I just don't like patches. =/

Tigerheart (Alt. A) - Redone
Comments? Tried keeping the same general pattern. 22:36, 05/26/2014

Oh and the OA was Ivyheart. 22:38, 05/26/2014

Maybe make him more golden? He looks rather brown. Great job, though. 22:41, May 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups. Thannk ye friend c: 22:52, 05/26/2014

Still should be more golden.

Reups 23:36, 05/26/2014