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Bluestar (D) - For Approval
Had trouble with the eyes, I'll redo them in the next upload, be nice if I did something wrong. --Gardenglaze 02:11, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

ear should be ripped. 02:30, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you please reupload under File:Bluestar.deputy.png? Your original file has two .png's, so I renamed it, but please upload under this file name. 03:00, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure velvetmoon has already got this reserved. 03:20, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

So, I should quit this and let velvetmoon take over? --Gardenglaze 04:18, June 26, 2016 (UTC)Gardenglaze

I apologise if this offends anyone. But I do have both Bluestar and Oakheart reserved. I will be posting the images soon. 15:05, June 26, 2016 (UTC)

Upload thought I would just upload on this. 20:09, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothe out the shading. 21:19, June 27, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe give it a little more depth towards the base of the tail? Some volume, so to speak? 22:49 Mon Jun 27

crop this to the lineart. 21:11, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make sure it consistently fills the area 04:13, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Got it to look better with smudged shading though I'm not 100% sure I like it. 12:29, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 12:43, June 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the butt please?  18:42 Wed Jun 29 

Reupload butt shading has been expanded! :) 10:21, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth out the head and tail shading a bit? 02:47 Fri Jul 1

Reupload 08:59, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more. 21:19, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload smooth as I'm gonna get it! 22:08, July 1, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks really hard edged compared to all her other images. Are you sure you can't smooth it more, or maybe even lighten it? 01:43, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I thought shading was an artists choice. But I blurred it insted of smudged it so it matches. 05:54, July 3, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a lot more. Also, shading is artist's choice.

Reupload I smoothed it a lot more now I hate it but if smooth shading is what you want here you go! 09:45, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the image should be cropped... 16:16 Fri Jul 8

Um it is cropped. 17:41, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light a lil on the near back foot? Also, it might just be me but I think the shading's leaking from the lineart a bit on her tail.  21:36 Sat Jul 9 

Shade more along the bottom edge of the cheek, if that makes sense? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:28, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be cropped to the lineart. There's too much extra space on <-- side of the image.

Reupload I can't crop it anymore or else the tail Will be gone. My program only allows for even cropping on both sides. I don't see why I have to crop it when the lineart artist can't? 09:32, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and maybe expand it a little. 13:43, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload 14:41, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Right now the shading is too hard edged, can you smooth it more? 20:55, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload  23:52, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. D) - CBA
I'm confused on which deputies I can do, but I'm pretty sure I can do this one? Comments? 13:36 Fri Jul 1

Define the shading. To clarify you can do any deputy image that is on the characters page and is not reserved. 11:13, July 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:10 Sat Jul 2

Swap the tail shading so that it makes sense with your light source.

Re-uploaded 15:15 Tue Jul 5

Smooth the tail shadig some and define the light on the lifted paw 20:33, 07/6/2016

Re-uploaded 09:02 Thu Jul 7

CBA? \

Sorry, but the shading on the front leg should be defined, and it's also leaking.

Re-uploaded 12:34 Fri Jul 8

Can I get a comment or a CBA on this? 13:43 Mon Jul 11

Next time, please don't ask for a CBA, or else you won't get one. People have been busy, so of course not everyone will get comments all the time. That being said, I really can't find anything wrong with this, so CBA?

Petalfall (D) - CBA
....can I get the file name fixed? Looks like the "L" key on my laptop was sticking. 01:59 Mon Jul 4

You can just reupload over File:Petalfall.deputy.png, honestly.

define the shading a lil more, and maybee smooth it out a little. this is gorgeous 20:38, 07/6/2016

Reuploaded Thank you^^ 01:09 Sun Jul 10

CBA?

Reedwhisker (D) - CBA
17:45, July 5, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit.

Extend the shading on the neck down more so it connects to the shoulder shading, bc this light source calls for the neck to be shaded, and a shadow of the head to be cast on the back (example because words are tough) <span style="">20:41, 07/6/2016

Still working?

Re-uploaded Sorry, I've been busy. I'm not sure if I got exactly what you meant with the shading, Ferk, but I tried. 22:27, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Lionheart (D) - CBA
Squigglestripe.  <span style="">11:03 Wed Jul 6 

Define the body shading.

Can you make the ruff a floofier at the back of the neck?

Actually, define shading everywhere? <span style="">21:00, 07/6/2016

reups  <span style="">16:22 Thu Jul 7 

Could you blur the facial shading some? Gorgeous image! <span style="">03:46 Sat Jul 9

Reups Thank you, but I smudge rather than blur. So I did that instead.  <span style="">08:20 Sat Jul 9 

CBA?

Silvermask (D) ~ For Evaluation
Here's hoping this one gets approved ;) -- 21:01, July 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading? <span style="">1:06 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded --  01:27, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Could you tone down the earpink? It seems very neon atm. <span style="">01:41 Thu Jul 7

Re-Uploaded -- 02:51 July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his face a little more noticeable? I know it's there, but I can barely see it. 07:57, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

should this guy even have an image? his page only says 'a dark tom', which could mean any colour. 09:40, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Can you lighten him. His previous image was grey and this looks black. 09:49, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Matching the previous image is not required. Also, I'm not sure if he should have the image either, tbh.

Because of his name, and the way his description is phrased, I think his stripe should be lighter than his base, personally. <span style="">15:41 Thu Jul 7

That's an assumption, though. It's fine being darker or lighter, and we don't make descriptions match what we think it could mean... it's fine as it is.

Re-Uploaded --  17:39, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink? Also on the topic of "should he even have an image", I think it's relevant to point out that Rubblepaw is also described as a dark tom and he doesn't get an image.  <span style="">20:26 Thu Jul 7 

Re-Uploaded (Shouldn't discussions go on PCA talk page like the should Silvermask have an image?) --  20:34, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

He looks black to me, I can't see anything on this image bar the ear pink. Also, the ear pink is a bit neon.

Re-Uploaded --  16:19, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? --  18:12, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

There seems to be an un-filled white pixel on the right-ish side of his face

Re-Uploaded --  00:23, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add more eye depth? (Basically add a darker green on the edge)

Re-Uploaded --  18:47, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Mudpuddle (D) - For Approval
I actually really like this. Since matching the previous image isn't mandatory, I totally did something else... wanted to redo his image anyways.

Define tail shading -- 17:40, July 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on his legs. Cloudy, this looks awesome! Did you base it off a picture or did it just come into your mind? 09:27, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nope. None of my images are based off real life pictures of cats, actually.

Leopardstar (D Alt2) ~ For Approval
Meh.  <span style="">23:38 Thu Jul 7 

Could you blur/smudge the ear shading a little? another really pretty image shinx !! <span style="">21:54 Sat Jul 9

There's a few pixels of earpink waste near the right ear-tip

Still working?

Cedarstar (D) - CBA
Good leader 14:02, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you lighten the belly white a little? <span style="">03:43 Sat Jul 9

Re-ups 09:58, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Hailstar (D) - CBA
Comments? 23:05, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading just a tiny bit?

Reuploaded. 15:15, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the neck shading slightly. 19:11, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, July 11, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Adderfang (D) - CBA
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 23:10, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

Trolly this is amazing! Do you think you could maybe define the shading on his face? 09:26, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded thanks icy 15:16, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Tallstar (D) - CBA
Hmm, not totally happy with this. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:34, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Gorsestar (D) - CBA
I'm not totally sure if the colors are accurate - I used the same colors that I used for his kit image, so there is that, but they were color-grabbed from the other images. And the shading color isn't the same. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:36, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Deadfoot (D) - CBA
literally a perfect cat. should the base be lightened? <span style="">04:31 Sat Jul 9

The base looks fine and this looks gorgeous. Maybe you can just smudge the earpink? 09:25, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded going to a week-long camp tomorrow. sorry for any inconsistencies. <span style="">01:33 Sun Jul 10

CBA?

Owlstar (SotC)(D) ~ For Approval
Comments? I'm not too fond of the shading on this

Don't his eyes need to be bigger? Also, blur a shading a little more. 01:04, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

The eyes look fine to me. Could you expand the facial shading some? <span style="">01:36 Sun Jul 10

No they need to be bigger because Owlstar is known for his big eyes. 02:38, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

It might just be me, but I'm pretty sure there are a few un-filled, white pixels on the bottom of the tail and back of the haunch. <span style="">10:44 Sun Jul 10

Maybe it's just my eyes, but it looks like there's some shading leaking by his tail. 15:09, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Now there's a few unfilled pixels toward the top-left part of the tail. <span style="">13:47 Mon Jul 11

Reuploaded I'm not quite sure why those appeared, but they should be gone now.

Sharpclaw (D) - CBA
wut is art 22:55, July 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. 13:40, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:09, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Bramblestar (D) - For Approval
Since I did most of his images all the colors are from them. 01:24, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading? <span style="">02:42, 07/10/2016

I'm pretty sure the bottom of his tail shouldn't be lighter in color, it isn't like that on any of the other images. <span style="">13:42 Sun Jul 10

You're missing the dorsal stripe on the top part of the tail, and Maple's right. The pale part shouldn't be on his tail. Also, the pale parts on the leader look a bit more blurred than this does.

The pale part is like that on his deputy (his former deputy) but sure I'll remove it since this is technically a redo. 16:19, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Sorry if this looks weird, his image is extremely dark on my screen so it's hard to see it properly. 02:09, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Forgot the dorsal stripe, sorry, I'll add that in the next upload. 02:21, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Harespring (D) ~ For Approval
Very unhappy with the shading :/ Comments? <span style="">10:42 Sun Jul 10

Define the shading 10:52, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Decided to change the direction of the shading, but it's still more defined than it was before. <span style="">14:24 Sun Jul 10

The shading is leaking away from the lineart a little on the belly, and could you smudge the earpink a tad?

Re-uploaded <span style="">09:10 Mon Jul 11

Lighten up the shading a bit; it's looking far too dark (and my screen's on maximum brightness as I type this). Also smooth it out a tad.

Kinda minor but his other images have a brown on the belly and 3 brown paws.

Re-uploaded <span style="">14:56 Tue Jul 12

Maplestar (D) - CBA
15:07, July 10, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Ashfoot(D) ~ For Approval
Comments?

Oakheart (D) ~ For Approval
12:45, July 12, 2016 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt D) ~ For Approval
12:59, July 12, 2016 (UTC)