Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Speckletail (W)~ Redone
OA was Nightshine and it needed to be brown and nobody likes triangle tabbies so heres this. 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot more, especially around the highlights (if you use them, of course) Guradian1098 01:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks pinkish-cream, not brown. 02:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

At least tint the base color to be more brown. 03:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ear farest from us. and her base coat looks gray, make the base coat match her elder. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't need to change it to match Oblivion's; she posted first, so Oblivion's should match hers. Lighten the shading a tad. 00:59 Sun Oct 30

As I suggested below, she should talk it over with Oblivion, and see what should be done. It shouldn't just be "Oh, she posted first" sort of thing. It's not fair to either artist. 23:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I've left Iceheart a message on her talk page. Now it's just a matter of waiting until she replies :3 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- sorry guys ive been crazy busy. 01:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She still needs to be more brown. This looks cream. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:31, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The changes werent showing... They are now. 08:58, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

No, I was looking at the right version. I still think it needs to be browner. It looks like cream still. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:03, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? 16:04, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes sorry m finally getting my lazy butt in gear. This is supposed to be pale brown, and when you google pale brown, the old colour comes up. If i make it any more brown its not pale anymore. 21:42, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well pale brown could mean just light brown, and this isn't light brown, it's dark cream. Honestly, the base color doesn't look all that much different than the old one, just the stripes do. Could you please change it? I guess if nobody else agrees with me though you don't have to. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:56, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) - Redone
The next one on her lineup. Redone to match the MC. Comments? 00:27, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the artist before you? And maybe add some more stripes so it matches the medicine cat image .Blur the ear pink, too Guradian1098 01:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I don't know and tbh I don't care. I can't add anymore stripes because I don't know where to put them, but I will blur the ear pink. 01:17, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It took me a few seconds to look up the OA of this image. 02:09, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well, I'm not you, and for your information, this project is concerned for the welfare of images and not for OAs. 02:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Icestorm, it's not that big of a deal and I thought we were supposed to say the OA anyway? Lighten the shading on her flank a tad. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Does it really matter who the OA is? Sometimes, it's hard to tell, 'cause most of these were moved from other file names. 02:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have shading on the flank. Do you mean the midriff? 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Flank = the area where your kidneys are. Judging by its location in a human, as well as Brackenfur's scar, I'd say it's where the shading is too dark. 02:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ohfail. I was thinking the My Little Pony flanks...where they have their cutie marks...yeahsorry XD 02:54, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and earpink a bit. 19:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

It looks like there's some smudged lineart on the tail; fix that. 06:09 Sun Oct 30

Re-Uploaded: Lightened shading on flank, blurred back shading, blurred earpink. Where is the smudged lineart? The lineart is perfectly fine. 14:29, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there waste all around the image? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's not. There is waste all around it. 16:49, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. 10:14 Mon Oct 31

And blur the ear-pink too. 17:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Icey, you still working on this? 18:08, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. I'll be working on this, its just my internet is failing me. 146.115.179.113 23:45, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Wildy though, the earpink does need to be lightened. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's the same color as her MC. (Icy) 146.115.179.113 23:27, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, honestly, that should have been changed too. IT's REALLY red. If it was only a little red, I'd get over it, but it bothers me when it this over-red. Please change it? *puppy dog eyes* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:25, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I can't work on this anymore. Life is being really hard. Please don't decline it anybody - can someone take over? 146.115.179.113 17:00, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I will. :3 00:15, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not as brilliant as Icy, but here we go. :p 01:18, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work. Darken the tail shading. 01:23, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ruby (KP) - Redone
I saw the shadings need blurring, I was thinking that I can only tweak but when I looked on it on my computer i saw that whole lineart is blurred. I take the base colour from it, other are new. OA is, I think MosspathOfSkyClan, Leaf-storm,13:25,November 2,2011 (UTC)

Was this on the list? And did you get permission to redo her? 19:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She also needs a black/dark grey nose. Sky- Gathering the army of  Trolls 22:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think Leaf's okay with this one. Blurred lineart is a pain in the butt to fix. xD 00:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I tryied fix it but i only made it worse, dark nose, yes here it is Leaf-storm,19:10,November 3,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 00:25 Fri Nov 4

How was is now? :-) Leaf-storm,13:15,November 4,2011 (UTC)

NEW reupload, I learned the layers in Gimp :-) Leaf-storm,20:51,November 4,2011 (UTC)

It's a lot darker than the other images, lighten it some. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:24, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,10:07,November 5,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it too. It's blotchy. 17:53, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

yes, now? Leaf-storm,16:10,November 6,2011 (UTC)

It's still awfully blotchy in some areas. Really blur it good, making sure the blur tool is on 100. 16:50, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I have it always on 100% right and now? Leaf-storm,19:33,November 6,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights more. 04:22 Mon Nov 7

Blurring,blurring, small break, blurring, hmm still blotchy?!!! Leaf-storm,15:01,November 7,2011 (UTC)

Hmm I think its worse, I need little hint because Im blind and I cant see that blotchy areas :-) Leaf-storm,15:09,November 7,2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the charart. Mostly I think the shading isn't as dark/light in some places and that messes up the consistency. Maybe redo the shading? 21:29 Mon Nov 7

hey it was already reuploaded a day ago, where's my comment? Leaf-storm,15:29,November 9,2011 (UTC)

Often enough, the wiki glitches and doesn't show comments. Or, it'll merge your comment with someone else. No worries. If we look at the file history, we'll see it's been reuploaded. =) 15:34, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Theres a lighter patch on its back, add some shading to that - 21:44, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Personally, the shading looks a little, akward if you ask me. 11:50, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Dark (TB) - Tweaked
My very first charart has returned <3 Anywho, we decided the To-be's got to have mud. So.. here he is. OA was me. Comments? 19:45, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the mud, it's kinda hard to see. 21:05, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. 21:55, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud more brown. Right now it kinda looks pinky :P 23:09 Sat Nov 5

The best thing to do would to be to take it off an approved black cat with mud (such as Screech) Don't worry, mud color can be hard :S  15:17, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 16:04, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes :P I have a ton of music to memorize and projects to do. Sorry about the break. -- 22:54, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened it a bit, and added two darker shades to smudge in. Changes are somewhere. -- 22:57, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste around the charart; probally where you smudged. Very nice! 23:59, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

^^As Sandstorm pointed out, waste. You smudged the mudstreaks out of the lineart. Nice. 00:31, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (R) ~ Redone
OA was Goldenpaw, needed to be gray-brown. Comments? 21:14, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

As lovely as this is, it needs to match Shellheart's version. 21:16 Sat Nov 5

Isn't Shelly supposed to do this? I just relized. 21:18, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, she is. I assumed she had already given you permission to do it, but if you ask her and she says yes, you can do it. 21:29 Sat Nov 5

Yes, you can do it if you want, but it'll be hard to match my stripes with the mud in the way... you sure you want to try? 21:59, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I will try. 22:01, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then, you need to work with the colors off of my image. Also, I gave her a marbled tabby pattern, and I believe she was still wearing mud as a rouge because she was still in the mountains and was probably still using it so she wouldn't be caught by eagles. 00:53, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink too? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:31, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. blah... 16:15, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

You got the pattern right, but the stripes should be sharpened. I barely blurred them on the cave-guard image. 16:22, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Make them more hard-edged and darken the earpink just slightly. 03:30 Mon Nov 7

Also, lighten it a bit. Looks like you worked form the shaded part of my charrt. 17:39, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

I am withdrawing this. Sorry, might not be able to get on everyday these days. 00:54, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Taking over since this was supposed to be mine in the first place. Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:07, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rock (CG) - Redone
I got permission from Scarletwind to redo this, and she recommended me to make him longhaired because of his "jagged" tail, but it was too late. Original artist was Grayravenpaw, and it needed to be more brown instead of reddish-brown. 15:45, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mud more noticeable. 20:22, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make his tail look "jagged"? It looks clean cut off. 21:16, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:21, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my laptop is broken, and it will take awhile until I get a new computer or if it gets fixed. Then I'll work on it. 18:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rushtail (WC) (E) - Redone
Original artists were Sandstar12 and Bracken-. He needed to be shorthaired. His original color came across to me as more of a ginger than creamy-brown, so I changed that. 16:48, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and saturate this a bit. It's supposed to be creamy BROWN, not light cream, but this is absolutely gorgeous~ Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:38, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the shading. :) Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 03:08, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw: I used Daisy's color, who is also described as creamy brown, so I'm not going to change it. 19:40, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

In that case, darken the earpink a bit. Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 00:45, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading <span style="">22:42 Wed Nov 9

Stonestream (W) - Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Echoheart. Comments? 23:36, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. 12:27, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:46, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. 23:35, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink/brighten it. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:04, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:31, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular please. 11:53, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Pine (TS) (Ro) - Redone
FAIL. My first rogue (odd, huh?). He needed to match the manga. OA was Brambleclaw. 00:15, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the head? Also redden the earpink a bit. Nice work! :D I love the stripes. 22:51, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:35, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the face less in shadow. <span style="">05:14 Thu Nov 10

Re-uploaded. 20:33, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

So much better than what i tweaked :P I hated his markings, so glad that is being re-done. Blur the shading/highlights(if you use any) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 01:12, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! 02:43, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftstar (L) ~ Tweaked
OA was a combination of Warriors808, Icestorm, Bramble and Iceheart, and the shading was blotchy and there was blurred lineart. 18:36, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful job! It looks fantastic. Just blur the tail and shoulder/arm shading and it should be done. 22:55, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:05, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Q) - Redone
OA was Sandstar12. Her color was incorrect, again on the list to be redone. I tried a slightly different angle as to where the light source is coming from. Comments for improvement? 18:44, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! Can you define the shoulder highlight/shading and blur the tail shading? 22:56, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:03, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading? 11:57, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing - Tweaked
I shoulda redone this shouldnt I? Tell me if I should, anywhoo OA= Nightfall101 and I made her a shorthair - 23:45, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, re-do it. Its shading is really blotchy. 23:46, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redo it. We don't have an issue. Bloo, those that need to be done as another pelt length are ones you don't need to ASK to redo. 23:47, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yea, I know. And srry it took so long - 00:04, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the ear-pink a tad. 12:07, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 18:27, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed to have stripes. OA was Sandstar12. <span style="">02:44 Wed Nov 9

Darken the shading & brighten the highlights(if you use them) - 03:02, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't use highlights, but darkened shading. <span style="">22:47 Wed Nov 9

Darken the shading just a tad more? -- 23:38, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Spiderleg (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match his warrior image. Comments? 16:11, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

OA is Darkhallows, going by what's on the file page. 16:11, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

The brown on the shest looks like it is more ot the right than the left og his chest. Can you fix that? Or is it supposed to be like that? 11:45, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

No one's perfect, Sweet. It doesn't NEED to be perfectly even. After all, I don't think it's like that on a real cat! 16:06, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the right earpink a bit? It think the brown patch is fine. 00:53, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. Bler the left ear-pink. 11:59, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Just re-did the ear pink, 'cause I hate it. 18:34, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (SC) - Redone
OA was Shimmerpool. The shading was all blotchy and the stripes on the back were basically invisible against the shading, so I redid it. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:18, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

This looks reddish, can you make the color more like that of Squirrelflight who is also a dark ginger cat? 23:59, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think i made it worse though... - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:32, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

You did not! This looks wonderful! Make the ear-pink a bit bigger? 11:37, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

And redden it as well? 23:37, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Q) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be fixed. OA was Hawkfire I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:11, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Paleclaw! Define the shading a little bit on the tail. 03:18, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Might as well define the shadiing on the whole image a bit - 21:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt Ki) - Tweaked
Added stripes. OA was Midnitesky. Leaf-storm,18:06,November 10,2011 (UTC)

Darken the head shading. Very nice job with the stripes!

Love it! Blur the M on the forhead a bit. 11:47, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfrost (W) ~ Tweaked
Technically, I redid it, but, everythig was on the same exact image. There was a tiny bit of blurred lineart, the shading...didn't even look like shading and the black and white needed to be blended a little better. I adore black and white cats<3 19:48, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

As far as I can see, OA is Sandy. 19:48, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, especially on the white parts. 20:04, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have two different layers of shading: one for the black and one for the white. Layers are a lifesaver. 20:14, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm too pro to use them :P. Lighten the black a tad. (Moonleaf) 74.198.9.247 22:00, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Moonleaf, hush. =P 'Re-uploaded. 22:02, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

The front paw seems a little light. Darken, if any, the shading? :3 23:35, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

I can't darken the shading anymore. If I add another layer, it'll just look funky. 18:31, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) - Redone
Redone to be dark cream without stripes. 00:41, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Flamingomom, and the color is from Daisy. 00:42, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, it's very blotchy. 146.115.179.113 00:48, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the earpink. 00:49, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes might not be showing. 00:51, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Another stole my reservation. >.> I am sorry but I reserved this first, and I even checked the revision history. It is not fair to me. 01:05, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. Would you mind if I did this, or would you rather do it yourself? I know what it feels like when someone steals my reservation, but I also know what it feels like to do a charart that takes a long time, put a lot of effort into it, and have to decline it, but it is yours, so if you want, I'll remove it. 01:09, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, I can't make you remove it, it would make me guilty, umm, keep doing it, it looks great! ^^ 01:12, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :3 You can do her kit version if you want, I won't reserve it. 01:14, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Rosepetal (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows, I had permission from Mistystar to do this. Needed to be dark cream, comments? 01:45, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes green, Like Mistystar's warrior version, and define the tail shading. Nice! 02:44, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize the earpink a little? -- 06:24, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Snow (TB) ~ Tweaked
Added mud. She was my other baby<3 I think the mud looks too much like patches, what do you think? OA was Me. Comments? 06:34, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's pretty! Can you add a mud streak to the back hauch? It looks lonely there :) 11:44, November 11, 2011 (UTC)