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Shnuky (KP) ~ Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this. She needed to be gray, not brown. OA= Sandy, tweaked by Ivystripe. Do you like the texture I gave it? xD I had fun making this one. Comments? 04:06, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Great, but she's cross eyed. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Heheh. Oops. =3 04:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mah, I hate it. XD jk. Blur the shading. Sky ☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred. ^-^ 05:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink? Lovely! 06:06, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

Reuploaded. 23:47, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (W) - Tweaked
He looked less blue with blotchy shadings, now he looks like redone (its not!) Darkhallows is OA ,14:07,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the paws and blur all the shading. 20:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also darken the shading on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:16, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the eyes be the same color as his deputy image? 15:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I know, Im going to tweak it **dont bite me*, Reuploaded,18:58,December 13,2011 (UTC)

How come you haven't changed his eye colour yet? This, as well as his apprentice image, won't be approved until you do. 02:14, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

looool ,20:57,December 14,2011 (UTC)

There's a lighter spot on his butt area, and the head highlight (or whatever) seems lighter than the other areas. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 09:45, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm hightlinks for white cats are not good, its just shading, ill fix that, reuploaded ,20:43,December 15,2011 (UTC)

The shading's a bit blotchy on the body, smooth it out a bit and darken the shading on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:59, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tumblekit (Ki) - Redone
Ok, I found another short-haired RiverClan cat and I've put his alt on this list for tweaking as well. Among that, he was only described as a tabby and he was depicted as gray, which is not our default tabby color. Not sure who the OA was, but we've got Sandstar12 and Bramble. I really like this, I enjoy not having to copy a pattern. Comments for improvement? 00:25, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

B'aaw! Make < this ears ear-pink smaller. 01:29 Tue Dec 13

OMI GOSH! IVY! He is sooo cute!~ Blur the highlights a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shading/highlights are fine Maple. blur the stripes ever so slightly. This is wonderful Ivy. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:36, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wetfoot (W) - Tweaked


This was just a simple tweak, really it was! xD New tabby style, what do y'all think? Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, OA was Bramble, and stripes needed to be tweaked. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

What exactly was kept from the old image....? Enlarge the highlight/lighter parts. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Colors, ear-pink, eyes, all the colors? even the stripes? I mean, the only thing i did was change his stripes....thats it....i swear.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:24, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I just noticed you have 4 chararts up. You can only have 3. You'll have to withdraw one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:26, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Just withdrew Adderfang. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:33, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see how this could've been tweaked if you redid the stripes and they don't even looks similar to the old image. Blur the "highlight" on the haunch. 01:37 Wed Dec 14

Here is what i did: I earsed the highlights and shading, then color picked the stripes, erased the stripes, and then re-drew the stripes and re-did the shading and higlights, and blurred everything. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:57, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

NOTE This was a TWEAK, this is NOT re-done, got it, if i see ONE more coment on how it looks re-done, you'll be ingored, got it? I'm SICK of peole saying i re-did it. I didn't I TWEAKED IT. End of story. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Maple, calm down. It doesn't matter if you tweaked it or redid it, as it needed to be redone anyway. Round out and blur the "highlight" on the haunch. 02:23 Wed Dec 14

Also fix the blurred lineart. 02:44 Wed Dec 14

What blurred lineart? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, just for future reference, that's kind of redoing and just color picking from the old image. Not that it matters in this case, like Wildy said, but technically, this is redone... Anyways, I see blurred lineart on the back and possibly the muzzle. Don't know if Wildy's talking about anywhere else. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:09, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

You captured the essence of what I was thinking, Paleh. You and me are brain-buddies. <3 Maple: the earpink also needs to be blurred. 08:11 Wed Dec 14

Kay, give me a bit... my sis had a meltdown, and scared my bro, trying to clam him down....and yeah....Life is greeaat Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 04:07, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Please dont comment to say you are going to reupload it, just when you actually do. It's a waste of space other wise. 04:11, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:37, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart and the earpink needs to be blurred more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights as well. 01:03, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:15, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken them more. It looks like the stripes aren't even there under the highlights. Blur the shading as well. 02:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt. D) - Redone
OA was Frostheart. Redone for all the reasons the leader version had (and, basically, to match the alt leader). Comments? 02:10 Wed Dec 14

Give him a torn ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:25, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:21 Wed Dec 14

Define the earpink, it looks like that it isn't there. 22:52, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (K) - Redone
Guh, Horrible. OA= Mosswisker&Stealthfire 05:53, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

No, not horrible Bloo, but can you make the earpink stand out more from the pelt. 06:11, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

On <--- this side of his left leg, there's some white on his apprentice image. Maybe add white there? 22:58, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste below that paws. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - earpink is taken from the apprentice image, so I didnt change them - 22:17, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Flight of Startled Heron (Km)~ Redone
Between the fact the colour was wrong, the stripes were wrong, the mud was wrong, and the shading wasn't good, I just redid it. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 01:09, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

She should have less stripes. 19:46, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smallear (E) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be blurred and darkened. I also added depth to the eye. OA was Bramble. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:25, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him so he matches his warrior. 01:26, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Oh derp, forgot about his warrior image. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:39, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tumblekit (alt.K) ~ Redone
OA was Nightflower; redone as a longhair. CommentS? 01:31, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Why do the eyes look blind? Make the earpink less hot pinkish/purple. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:37, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:38, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Woody - Redone
Um.. *Steps into unknown territory* First charart that I've tweaked/Re-done. :3 So...Yepp. ;) . 01:41, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yay for your first tweak! ^^ This is lovely. Move the fur next to the head over ---> this way a bit, so it looks more like it's attached to the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:44, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is why i luffles your skill, this is awesome!Darken his eyes a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (R) - Redone
OA was Darkhallows. Shading and highlights needed to be redone - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:52, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D) - Redone
First tweak (nervous). His descrption stats that his teeth curve out from under his lip. Iceheart said I could do this. OA was Mossleap. Comments? 02:55, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

They look like flecks of gray fur. Add lineart around them and define their shape 03:12, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

And define the highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:35, December 16, 2011 (UTC)