Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Re-uploaded 02:43, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MCA) - Tweaked
Defined and added shading depth; oa was Jenrock. Comments? 06:11 Tue Aug 13

The shading looks kinda blotchy; smooth it out? 13:20, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:23 Tue Aug 13

It still looks a bit blotchy. 23:36, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

It also looks kind of paintbrushy/blunt. 23:33 Wed Aug 14

Millie (W) – Redone
Redone due to none of the images matching each other and the stripes didn't flow that well. Original artist was .Mooneh. Changes might not be showing. Comments? 21:48 Tue Aug 13

Hmm, maybe define the shading some more, to make it more visible? This is purdy, Ravie 21:49, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Not everywhere, imho. Maybe the legs/feet, and possibly the tail.

Sol (KP) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA was Icy, tweaked for tufted tail. Comments? 23:09, 08/13/2013

Tufted tail looks frayed and poofy. Have it like, more teardrop-shaped? 23:34 Wed Aug 14

Reuploaded. I think this is what was meant? Also, changes won't be showing for a few minutes- Wikia's being annoying. 01:44, 08/15/2013

Sol (Alt Ro [2]) ~ Tweaked
So I used Beebs' lineart for this.

Although it was not nominated for this, could you define the tail shading a bit? 00:21, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading, and if anyone has a problem with that, I'll go back to the other one. The previous version just had so many issues with it and it was difficult to work with.

Petaldust (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Yurt and tweaked by me. Redone and all colors match the other images.

Define the lightsource, wonderful image! 02:10, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, honestly. I shade all my kit images like this.

Eyes are artist's choice, but all cats need pupils.. 23:35 Wed Aug 14

There are pupils. .-.

Sol (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Ok, so whoever had this reserved earlier (can't remember who) no longer has it reserved. Latest oa was Raelic, and was tweaked to have a tufty tail. 18:36, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Make the whole tuft white. 19:40, 08/14/2013

Define the tail shading a bit? o3o 20:43, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Rosetail (W) ~ Redone
Changes might not show until after some time. Last OA was me, redone for tail and not-that-flowy stripes. Comments? o3o 20:44, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

This could just be me, but could you make the tail a tad bit more pink, it almost looks like her base pelt color now. 21:35, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if anyone disagrees i'll change it 23:38, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine as well, any pinker and it'll be unrealistic. Smudge the pale part underneath the eye, it seems forgotten :3 Nice! 23:43 Wed Aug 14

I mentioned to you yesterday about making the tail a little more pink, Beebs, and I stand by that choice now.

Re-up. 23:59, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Forgot to save it to the .xcf =P 00:50, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Same reasoning as her elder 02:31, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Cinderpelt(A) - Tweaked
OA was me retweaked shading, comments? 21:35, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Rosetail (E) ~ Redone
changes might not be showing until after some time. OA be me, redone for stripes and tail. Comments? 01:12, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Turns out she's not cited as a ginger, but if her tail is pinkish-orange, so would her body. 02:27, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Hareflight (FQ) (W) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike and Paleh I think. Tweaked for shading and color. All I did was play with the hue-saturation on GIMP, add a white overlay, add new shading, and add a new lineart layer so the shading and overlay wouldn't mess the only lineart up. Comments? 02:00, August 15, 2013 (UTC)