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Jagged Peak (Alt ES) ~ For Approval
wow he's adorable. Belllastar (talk) 13:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Did you forget the earpink? lol. Thicken the shading on the main body; nice job! 14:11 Sat Oct 24

Define the light on the legs and tail. 14:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ya I did and I struggled with tail shading, but i will try again --Belllastar (talk) 14:19, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define overall shading. 14:46, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups what do you think of the crippled foot, and can somebody fix the link to his page Belllastar (talk) 15:32, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front legs/chest a little bit more. 18:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define facial shading a bit? He gets these great images and he's so annoying, heh --Dewsplash (talk) 01:07, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:07, October, 25, 2015

I think the stripes taper a bit more on his other images. they also seem to be more hard edged and they seem to be darker. 09:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I disagree aboat the stripes but i'm fixing the shading right now Belllastar (talk) 13:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Fff I was looking at the wrong image. Lease define the shading depth. 14:27, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

And could you define the light on the front legs, maybe? 23:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes just a tiny bit. Also define the light on the chest and face, if that's not already been said (I'm kinda tired and can't focus). Also, define the ear pink- it's pretty much all in shadow, I think, and I can't see it at all.

No date on this. Declining. 20:58, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please don't decline this I worked so hard, I reserved this on october 21st 2015, I am sorry I thought that was for tweaking only and this I my second charart, please cut me some slack, if you decline this I am going to cry! --Belllastar (talk) 22:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Bell it has to be declined because you didnt put your reserve date down, and that's part of the rules. 22:50, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

can I re-claim it then and add the date again (I realy was proud of this guy and wanted to see it be approved) --Belllastar (talk) 00:09, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Since its declined you have to wait 2 weeks to reclaim it, so someone could have a chance to try it. --Dewsplash (talk) 00:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 00:15, October, 29, 2015

then can I tweek the art and do his non crippled image, or do I have to-redo it --Belllastar (talk) 00:29, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Only warriors and above are allowed to tweak images 00:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I know I meen can I use the same art, just redo his foot for the non-cripled versoin --Belllastar (talk) 00:40, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to wait 2 weeks to reclaim, that's only on images declined for the one month limit, and yours wasn't. I'm not sure how long the waiting period is, though. 00:56, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

It's nonsense that you have to wait for two weeks. That's only if its declined due to the one month limit. You can re-reserve this right away. 00:58, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Yay!! --Belllastar (talk) 01:15, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups thanks to Burntclaw and Icebreeze (luv your user names) --Belllastar (talk) 01:24, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I still think more light could be added to the face and chest. Perhaps either erase some of the shading there, or add a new layer of highlights? (for highlights I suggest setting the layer mode to overlay, then drawing white onto the areas where the light hits) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:17, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Added hylights all over (I just learned how) --Belllastar (talk) 02:50, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Add light to his chest 13:43, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink and its shape- I can't see it at all. I've also renamed this to File:Jagged Peak.es.alt... I'm pretty sure he gets another image without the broken leg..? I think? Please reupload under the proper filename now.

The chest is fine Its meant to be dark. --Belllastar (talk) 16:41, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

There should still be a little light there, with this source. Also, define the earpink just a tad 22:42, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Can I use the same file if I do the Non crippled image or do I have to redo it? --Belllastar (talk) 22:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Add more light on the face and chest 04:49, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups --Belllastar (talk) 20:30, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading.

It's fine (I losst the file so thats not possibal) --Belllastar (talk) 01:39, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

You can tweak it while it's still up, it's very much possible, and i agree it should be sharpened. 01:41, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

how do I just tweak the shadeing without seprate layers? --Belllastar (talk) 02:41, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Please use proper grammar bell it's part of the rules. As for the image, open it up as a whole in your program, and just put a layer on top of it on multiply and basically add some more shading 02:45, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups --Belllastar (talk) 21:51, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly Snowdapple, will you stop scolding other users? You are not a lead, and it's seriously starting to border on minileading. Simple mistakes shouldn't be pointed out harshly if it only happens once. I know for a fact typos happen to everyone. This is honestly starting to get really annoying.

As for the image, define the light/shading on the tail. 14:53, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups --Belllastar (talk) 20:35, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Daisytoe (Star)- CBA
How do you not thumb the images, idk ;-; Anyway, here is my Daisytoe starclan  thingy ;u; Idk how to not thumb the images im so sorry DX

Sagestream (talk) 02:50, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

-- Reups - Forgot grey paws oops Sagestream (talk) 02:56, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yo, this is pretty good! Maybe blur/smudge the shading a bit? Also, to not thumb the images, sue source mode and simply get rid of the "thumb". 03:20, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Thanks, Burnt c: Sagestream (talk) 03:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. --Dewsplash (talk) 03:37, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 03:37, October, 25, 2015

Reups Sagestream (talk) 03:41, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading and add eye depth. 03:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 04:00, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste (I think) bordering outside of the charart. Blur and define the shading some more.

Reups u.u Sagestream (talk) 04:23, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

You're uploading a different image every time. Please upload under File:Daisytoe.star.png to prevent the unnecessary deletion of images. 09:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. 12:14, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

The ears on the mickey mouse heads should be more rounded. Also, the base for the white is pure white, if that helps. (If you want the file, just ask.) 13:17, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Apologies, Burnt. it just kept popping up with the 'you have a file with this name already here' and i finally found the overwrite button... ^^' Sagestream (talk) 17:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading, please? 23:13, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 02:11, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

There's a strange darker blob on >>> that leg. Could you somehow fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:10, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

This image needs to be named Daisytoe.star.png so it works with the charart template on her page. Also, as a reminder, the next time you reserve an image, you also need to add a date. I've fixed it for you this time, but the next time, your image will be declined.

I think the shading is leaking from the lineart along the belly 17:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sagestream (talk) 02:03, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please name the file Daisytoe.star.png Like Skye told you. And the ears from the micky mouse pattern still need to be a little more rounder. Thre is also waste on her shoulder. 02:07, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups For me, it says it's name is Daisytoe.star.png.... Sagestream (talk) 02:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

-- OHH okay i found out the problem, i capitalized the 'Star' Sagestream (talk) 02:20, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The waste is still there. 02:44, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's gone?? Sagestream (talk) 03:23, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see waste... And since you know what you're doing, I'm promoting you into an apprentice. 03:25, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ok what you're already an apprentice ^^; next time put the title as For Approval 03:26, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I was a kit when I first made this image so that's why it was "For Evaluation" :p Sagestream (talk) 04:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

White's looking gray. Nice job! 05:18, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

My main pelt layer is actually pure white; maybe it's the shading? Sagestream (talk) 05:37, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the stomach we=here the tail and the elbow meets. 12:42, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see where the shading leak is..... Sagestream (talk) 23:12, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's mainly on the spot where the tail and the main body intersect, and it's leaking away from the belly too. I hope that helped! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:38, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I think i got it. ;u; Sagestream (talk) 02:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Went ahead and fixed an alignment for you. ^.^ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 14:15, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still see leaking shading on the belly. 13:42, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 18:20, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Don't align your images. Can you brighten the white on the main body? It's looking a little gray. Also, smooth out the tail-tip shading. 20:50, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

reups I can't really brighten the main white, it's pure white Sagestream (talk) 21:19, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

then thin out the shading 09:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the face seems to be just a strait blurred line (ha, blurred lines) Mind curving it a bit so it looks more realistic? 12:29, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re ups  u.u Sagestream (talk) 04:42, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 04:48, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

the shading is still flat and the legs are very grey. 16:37, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can it be smoothed out on the main body as well? 03:43 Fri Nov 6

Still working? 13:26, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes - just recently I haven't had access to a computer, I should tomorrow though. 16:21, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Nevermind - I should have it up soon u.u. 16:32, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Quick question! How do i update the photo if it's forcing me into source mode and won't let me go to visual? 16:43, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Op nevermind (Again >.<) I got it 16:47, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Riverstar (Cotp) - For Approval
Don't comment on shading, I'm gonna define that. Also River Ripple is second best cat. 20:59, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are darker than on his other images. Agreed. He is awesome 23:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look a little too blurry - but, you don't need to change it. Beautiful job. Sagestream (talk) 23:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I can redo the stripes if you want, I'm not super happy with them either. 03:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

blur the stripes a tad more. 03:48, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten them Belllastar (talk) 11:19, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on his tail. Could you sharpen the stripes, too? 16:00 Thu Oct 29

the white pixel is the blank in general, i'll get to that. but right now, i'm confused. do you guys want me to blur the stripes or sharpen them? i'm getting confusing comments. -appledash who cant signature on the school computer b/c she cant find the little key to do it with

Ignore the latter part of my comment(Where it's crossed out). 22:16 Thu Oct 29

Re-uploaded: 00:20, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading on <== that leg 09:08, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Fix the area above the tail on his hind leg, it looks like the shading was accidentally blurred/ diluted. 18:49, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Add/define belly shading? -- 20:27, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 21:00, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on the leg to our right. Maybe try adding another layer of thinner shading to fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:15, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 18:32, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking on the tail ouo 02:58, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 07:36, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Add more dempth to chest shading? --Dewsplash (talk) 00:11, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 01:23, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

add light to the legs 08:50, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I didn't totally just lose the file to this. <_< 22:46, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, especially on the face 03:43, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh the stripes seem to be very hard edged with barely blurred pixels surrounding them. 04:17, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I blurred the stripes, I don't know if they look too blurred now. 04:44, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the muzzle. 07:46, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 16:35, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading just a tad? 21:32, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 03:21, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Did you define the light on the muzzle? If so, I think it can be defined some more. 04:19, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 04:41, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Shading's leaking on the haunch 23:58, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 03:20, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is still leaking on the haunch, as far as I can see. Nice. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:27, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 00:33, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (ES) ~ For Approval
Oh sheesh I love Pebbleheart <3 I've never thought much about him before the Dawn of the Clans Arc. Oh and colours from the warrior. 23:13, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and add more? 0:48 Sun Nov 1

Do you mean on the main body and tail? Most of the other stripes match the other images generally. 01:22, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, yeah. Just the main body and tail. 1:26 Sun Nov 1

Could you brighten up the white patch? Great job! 02:56, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! 03:36, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little more 06:51, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on the leg closest to us less...unnatural? Stripes don't go that way 11:19, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:01, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 00:08, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you explain in what way please. Does he need the base colour and stripes darkened to match the other images or do I need to darken the shading? 00:18, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot more; if you're not using pure white, I suggest it. Also, the stripes are much thinner on his MC... I'd say no more than two pixels wide, at the most. Many of these are much larger.

There are more y stripes on this image than there are on his mc, and the stripes are darker on the mc. 12:13, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:18, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes some more. 02:01, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 02:48, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

make the stripes more "pointy" and smudge the white more 13:24, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:51, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be darker. Are you picking it off from the mc image? And define them some more. 01:01, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 20:54, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

white is still too gray and needs to be smudged more 00:07, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm not too sure about that. It's brighter than Pebbleheart's other images, considering it's supposed to have shading a little over it. It's also more blurred than the other images too. 01:41, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes more. Also, I'm sorry, but I colorpicked from more images. Your stripe color is 3b3b3b, while Pebbleheart's MC is 1c1c1c. Can you please fix that? 02:34, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:08, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define his stripes. they look too blurred. 03:46, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

imo it's going to look too sharp if she sharpens them. But I still stand by the fact that the white chest could be smudged more 11:45, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Well, can I have another opinion on the stripes and white chest? 21:51, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Please smudge the white chest more. 03:40, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:49, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe add some more shading or smudge the chest more? Also, I still do think the stripes need to be defined or "pointy". I'm sorry if this seems bothersome. 19:49, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload If I still need to define it, can I have some advice? I cannot sharpen it and darkening it doesn't seem an option. 00:55, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad? This is gorgeous ;w; 16:52, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

The art looks very flat, imo. smudge the chest upwards a little more and smooth it out too, and define the shading on the hauch and face 04:47, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Tried something different with the white chest. There's no haunch shading as the light is from the top left. 05:21, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Nettle (ES) For Approval
I was so lazy on this haha... 01:22, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the legs? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 06:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:40, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

expand it more 00:07, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:15, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

add shading to the ears 05:01, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

still working?

Yes, sorry! I'll be able to reupload it later today. 15:42, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:30, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Add shading to the chest? :3

Honey Pelt (ES) ~ For Approval
Honey honey honey honey bae sweetie sweetie rules

Lighten the shading a bit.. imo, I think it clashes a bit too much with the pelt.

Hes said to look exactly like his father. Would you like the file? 06:02, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

You need to cite that, Winter. All I saw was that he has the same color stripes and fur color as his father. That does not mean they look alike.

http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Honey_Pelt?diff=1017153&oldid=1016728 12:49, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Where did you get the information? All it says is that you added it to his trivia.

uh, the book? 02:15, November 5, 2015 (UTC) Yea I saw it :P I'll redo the thing hopefully after school tomorrow

Still working, Bramble? 11:42, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, lighten the shading a bit. — Even the most simplest of lies   can change   everything.  20:33, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I'm getting my laptop back today! I'll reup asap

redid also removed the waste

Reduce and blur the shading above the back leg, it shouldn't go up that far. 15:12, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere 15:15, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be lightened a little as well. 21:30, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups I seriously love dark shading too much on this blank =P

Bubbling Stream (ES) - CBA
Ugly shading is ugly, I will be redoing it >.> 16:00, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the ear pink easier to see? I legitimately cannot tell she has it.

Slides in and says, I can see it just fine ~russettail13

just because you can doesnt mean everyone else can. 16:14, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded I darkened it a bit and redid the shading. The original ear pink was referenced off photos of two of my cats, who are white, and they have hardly visible pink. 16:18, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

the shading or whatever is also making the white look cream. 16:33, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:47, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the patches and smooth out the shading some more please 12:52, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 13:39, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a tad more. 03:43, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I correct myself. The shading is fine. 13:23, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Mmmm I actually think it needs to be smoothed out more 17:19, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Any particular spot? They only places I can really see it maybe needing smoothed a little is her chest/neck area. I'm fixing some flat shading in that area, so I'll smooth it after I finish that. 03:09, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

tbh the shading is beautiful as it is

reuploaded I smoothed out the neck and chest shading just a little bit and added another layer for depth as it was looking a little bit flat. I think it looked good as well, but I can always revert it if I need to 03:21, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Wrong version got uploaded >.<; 03:24, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Rocky (ES) - CBA
I will tweak the shading,or change the tint next upload 16:28, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Ok,i changed a lots of things XD 20:58, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:29, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading texure, especially on the legs. I love what your going for, but it looks more like splotches than fur. 16:47, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the tail? 22:55 Thu Nov 5

Re-ups 23:55, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading on tail and hind leg can be expanded by a bit^^

Re-ups 11:35, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white patches. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:06, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 18:19, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Volestar (Star) - CBA
vole is a funny word 02:10 Thu Nov 5

define the shading on the belly 02:12, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:26 Fri Nov 6

I can't really find anything wrong here. Comments before approval? 03:41, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading please 03:49, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

define tail shading --Belllastar (talk) 14:24, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

uh the tail shading is fine 14:59, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Watch your wording, please - 'uh the tail shading is fine' could come across as rude to some. 23:33, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I agree with Bella about the tail shading. Define it some, please. 01:18, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define light source on the main body?

reuploaded 00:54 Tue Nov 10

Comments before approval? 00:48, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Spider Paw (ES) ~ For Approval
Would he need the extra toe on this blank? I'm not sure. 17:42, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

if you can fit it in i'd say go ahead, especially because he's named for it. 17:48, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you also possibly define the shading depth? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:28, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reups extra toe is on the lifted paw 14:33, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. Flame star22  19:53, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Since it's smudged, I thought I'd lower the shading opacity instead. 13:02, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading more on the back and tail? 16:02 Mon Nov 9

His tail seems striped. 05:54, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

It's just smudged shading, which I'll take care of. 15:32, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Dusk Nose (Kit) ~ For Approval
My first kit and tortoiseshell! :D With the tortoiseshell and white debate going on, I gave her a creamy chest instead of white. I hope that's okay with the standards. I'm somewhat proud of this, but it definitely needs some sort of improvement. Anyways, enough with the talking and comment away! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:56, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Add some orange like her description says so. This is nice!--Dewsplash (talk) 02:02, November 6, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 02:02, Novembet, 6, 2015

She shouldn't have a creamy chest. She's only black and orange. 03:45, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the darker areas? It's kinda hard to decipher the black from the shading. 03:47 Fri Nov 6

Reuploaded Thanks Dew! I added orange, dulled down the pale chest and defined the shading. Hopefully this looks better. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 05:59, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the black and saturate the orange? Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:25, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened the base color and slightly saturated the orange. Does this look better? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:27, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Saturate the orange more? Since she's a specifically orange-and-black tortie, I feel like those colors should be pretty distinct. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:06, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

She shouldn't have any brown on her, if that's what I'm seeing. She's just specifically black and orange. 14:32, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the delay >< I made the pale chest gray and I saturated the orange some more. Is that ok? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 04:42, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, she shouldn't have gray at all. Please remove it. 13:22, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I replaced the gray chest with a pale orange. Is that ok? If not, I can remove it. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:38, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

i dont see why not, its still orange. define the shading a bit more. 13:44, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkened it and sharpened it slightly. Does that look better? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 13:56, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

She still looks kinda gray. Can you try making her more brown? 23:27, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please clarify that? Why does she need to have any brown on her? She was specifically called orange and black. I was told to remove it a while ago. O.o ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:25, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

She didn't say add brown. She said make it more brown, as in a brown tint or shade on the color wheel, not full on brown.

Reuploaded I'm still not sure why I have to make her browner, but I shifted the base color towards the brown side a little more. I hope that looks ok. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:07, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Dawn Mist (ES) ~ For Approval
Getting freaky with the shading. 06:14, 06, 11, 2015

would you like the file? there are many layers of texture and I'm sure it'll help with colors too 06:18, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

also, i think you color picked from a highlight area. it seems very light 06:24, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Haha ok that helped a lot thank you 18:24, 06, 11, 2015

The stripes seem to be more tapered than how they are now. 05:37, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:58, 07, 11, 2015

I think there should be more texture lines. Sho pretty btw^^

Re-uploaded Thank you :> <span style="">00:42, 09, 11, 2015

Brighten the white patches? They look cream. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:40, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, white doesn't have to look 100% pure white. Pure white is actually extremely rare and white is nearly always affected by colored highlights and shading. Also, she has an image to match. 02:43, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, but it looks too cream. There's an image to match, but both of her other images looked much more white. At least brighten it to white on where the light would be hitting those patches? Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:48, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Her rogue image has whiter whites, but the queen(which came first) doesn't, so I think it's fine. <span style="">16:01 Mon Nov 9

Re-uploaded I thinned out some of the texture on the white anyway lmao <span style="">17:18, 09, 11, 2015

Itty bits of white waste along the rump, tail tip and back/lifted paws. 17:49, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

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Rooktail (Star) ~ For Approval
18:59, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

this should be longhaired. 19:01, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

It looks like Moon Shadow lol. Define head shading a tad? ~Russettail13

I thought this looked lke Moon Shadow, too. Jaysnow (talk) 20:56, November 6, 2015 (UTC)Jaysnow

I would think that Neha used the base from Moon Shadow for Rooktail, and used the shading from Moon Shadow- they're her images, so it's perfectly acceptable.

No, I thought this was perfectly fine. After all, they are similar cats in description. Jaysnow (talk) 21:30, November 6, 2015 (UTC)Jaysnow

Smooth out the shading. 03:42, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Micah (Ro) - For Approval
Yay more Micah 03:39, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:26, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

In the starclan image, he is shown with a thicker stripe running down his back... 04:13, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

That means you forgot the dorsal stripe. Define the shading on his fabulous tail some more? :3

reups 22:34, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Micah (Alt Star) ~ CBA
Awesome cat with the awesome green shading 04:15, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file for the eye color? It actually looks a bit too bright in comparison 12:54, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Do eyes have to match? O.o 13:05, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Whatever 13:13, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Scribbled texture XDDDD define facial/head shading?

I would say that some shading could be added to <<<< that ear, as there would be at least some shadow there. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 05:56, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

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Comments?

CBA? 01:28, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother (Alt. Star) - For Approval
Tried to match the previous. 04:02, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

white looks cream again. 11:42, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Should look better now. 13:04, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

The white still looks cream. 13:55, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

It looks like a light light brown tbh 14:23, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:05, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

I can't actually tell that's supposed to be white. Could you brighten it more? <span style="">15:59 Mon Nov 9

Honestly, she looks fine. Burnt is even using pure white. 23:26, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly agree with Princess. I've looked at it on multiple screens, and it doesn't look white to me. 01:40, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Alright guys you all say it looks cream- but honestly if this were meant to be a cream and white cat would you /really/ categorise this as cream? This is pure white with 4 layers of highlights. of course a little bit of orange would give it a bit of a cream tint but that doesn't make it cream. This is honestly all I can do- it is pure white. I cannot brighten it anymore unless i completely get rid of the shading. This is all I can do. It is rare for white to look pure white under all light conditions because white reflects all colors, and keep in mind that she won't be 100% clean and brightly white. In fact, this is looking too white and flat for my preferences. You guys seem to want a pure, flat out white cat, which honestly is not my preference. 01:54, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Rocky (KP) - For Approval
I'm going to work on this some more. For some reason these images always seem to look better in my art program. 15:07, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed a few things that were really bothering me 19:58, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Falling Feather (ES) ~ For Approval
<span style="">16:45 Sun Nov 8

define the head/facial shading? 17:21, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Mouse Ear (ES) ~ For Approval
23:50, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does that look like an eyelash next to his left, our right, eye?--Dewsplash (talk) 00:36, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

It's just you....nice work, David..imo nothing really needs to be defined or corrected. Jaysnow (talk) 01:11, November 9, 2015 (UTC)Jaysnow

Please don't comment if you don't have any critique to offer. Trolly can you define the light source on the tail a tad? 01:08, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

No, I see the eyelash-looking stripe on the right eye as well... 04:11, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Idk it's a stripe, so I don't really think it's anything to fuss about. 04:45, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded if youll look on the rogue, that has it too so im not changing it. just because it looks like an eyelash doesnt mean hes suddenly female. 11:09, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Windstar (ES) ~ For Approval
I havent made a charart in over a year, so please go easy if i did something wrong.-- 02:58, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. Could you define the neck and facial shading slightly? 03:10, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:10, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes are smudged a bit on the StarClan image.. and tbh I think the stripes are the tiniest bit lighter. Also, did you add the texture to the stripes, because I can't tell.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Yep, theres texture. 14:31, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Dangling Leaf (K) ~ For Approval
Texture on kits is the bane of my existence. <span style="">3:31 Mon Nov 9

could you add more stripes on the tail? 07:25, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

doesnt need more stripes, but they could be defined a bit. 11:20, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Added another stripe and defined all of them. <span style="">15:57 Mon Nov 9

Can you lighten or tweak the base? All I see is pitch-black. There's no lineart, no texture, nothing.

Re-ups <span style="">13:38 Tue Nov 10

Alright, now can you lighten the shading a tiny bit as well? I'm still seeing random blobs of pitch-black in places, but mainly the neck and --> side of the cat.

Re-uploaded Is that good, or should it be lighter? <span style="">17:49 Tue Nov 10

Nope! The only thing left that I can see that might need to be done is the nose pink. I think most black cats have either super dark or black noses. Or at least that's what I was informed of.

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Harepounce (star) ~ For Approval
Harepounce for President  04:54, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Remove or thin out the facial shading <== there 11:15, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 15:07, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the tail shading just a bit. <span style="">20:31 Mon Nov 9

Shading is leaking on the ear. 15:01, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think you forget to fill in the nose. If you did fill it in just disregard this comment. <span style="">18:04 Tue Nov 10

It is filled. Anyway, she looks slightly cross-eyed.

I dont see how she does... She is supposed to look bottom right. 00:11, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Hollypelt (StarClan) ~ For Evaluation
My first Charart!!! It actully doesnt look bad. Im not In the PCA, can I still post this? 18:41, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, even if you aren't part of PCA, you can still contribute. Nice job, define shading? Also, do you think you could make her a little lighter of black? I know she's black but it's extremely difficult to see her lineart also, please define the ear pink? 00:22, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Acctully, everything is fine, I can see the earpink and the lineart. If you colourpick the base from here it matches the warrior. There are highlights on both images. 01:23, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I actually cannot make out the lineart on the back half. Please add some more highlights or dull down the base 01:45, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I thought there's an image to match

Yes, the base cannot be changed, it has to match the warrior. <span style="">1:55 Tue Nov 10

I think the nosepink needs to be black. I could be wrong, though.

Warriors don't have nosepink, so it doesn't matter. <span style="">13:41 Tue Nov 10

..All the colors macth the warrior. They both have highlights, and i'll get to the nse as soon as i get home- but one question- is it pure lack or like- very dark gray? 15:00, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest using a very, very dark gray. 15:49, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

Use the color from the warrior. For the nose, I suggest the same color as the earpink. <span style="">17:50 Tue Nov 10

Again, black cats normally have darker colored noses- it wouldn't always be the same color as the ear pink. In fact, it probably shouldn't be.

Snail Shell (Ki) - For Approval
tiny baby