Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 238

Cherrytail (W) ~ Approved
wad made to match the old warrior since that is first in the set, also match to the apprentice.  Ellie  life is an illusion 05:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading depth on the back paw closest to us; the shading looks darker than the rest of the image. Also, define tail shading near the base of it.

Re-Ups  Ellie  life is an illusion 10:31, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white paws, some

Leaking shading on the white paw closest to us, and could you smudge out the ginger patch right underneath her ---> eye? 20:13, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I don’t think changes are showing, Mink. I can’t see a difference between the uploads, can reupload again or show the changes elsewhere?

Comparing to the other images, the ginger needs to be a tad more orangish. This looks yellow. 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked from the file I had as well as the warrior and since the warrior came first that's the one I need to match as well as the apprentice. Especially considering most of images don't matches colorwise or patternwise I think I'll leave it to match the warrior and apprentice. Also, I'll upload on the changes soon  Ellie  life is an illusion 21:23, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking at the > paw

03:07, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I can't lighten the paws very much as that affects the whole shading but I did erase some you could tell it was white  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:34, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

The paws still look distinctly gray, imo. You could always put the lighter shading for white on a separate layer so it doesn't affect the rest, that's what I did in one of the earlier versions of the loner.

I can only do that with the front paws as the back would be completely covered in shading with my source.  Ellie  life is an illusion 09:10, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Just because something’s completely in shading doesn’t mean we shouldn’t be able to tell it’s cooor underneath. All of the paws have a hard time looking white, which, creatively, is a completely rectifiable issue.

Re-Ups i tried, this is about as white as looking as the back paws are getting but i can verify they are 100% pure white under the shading  Ellie  life is an illusion 21:23, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

There's two pixels of waste between the hind paw and the <--- front paw. Ohterwise I think this looks amazing :) 22:45, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks Vec, I'll wipe that out soon  Ellie  life is an illusion 00:51, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups  Ellie  life is an illusion 19:32, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved! 20:56, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Applefrost (K) - Approved
colour picked from her family tree icon

What's your light source? As the haunch shows it from above but the way the facial shading is suggests otherwise <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:14, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

It’s literally the same shading I’ve used for all my kits, dude.

It's not much different than any source I've used, or that I've seen used. Perhaps it's just more apparent due to this lacking texture or tabby markings. Regardless, the guideline for shading is that it needs to represent a 3D object, not that it needs to be 100% accurate- that's just the forced realism in the project that appears to have become standard.

s fine yeah. CBA?

Approved! 20:56, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) ~ Approved
like this one so much more than the old one :p

00:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading lines to smooth out the transition on the shoulder shading? The very top. And some more on the haunch and tail shading, too, while you're at it. 03:20, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading.

00:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading just at where the tail bends in the middle, and define it on the < ear?

Reuploaded Tried my best with smoothing it

17:53, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

I think this could be smoothed a lot more, its still super rough. You could try transitioning it so it fades into the fur as the way it is now makes it look very abrupt. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Solid colored cats with no texture = war on textured shading. i tried to smooth it out lmao

15:42, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading looks really good! could you smooth the transition slightly on the bend of the tail? other than that spot I think it's good to go <span style="">17:14 Thu Jun 13

Reuploaded Thank you Splook!

16:48, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Approved! 20:56, June 15, 2019 (UTC)