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Stoneclaw (W) ~ For Approval
Trying this with GIMP. -- 23:09, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink?Broken_Foot

Define the shading on the tail 23:11, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Base color doesn't seem to match other images

Smooth out the blotchy parts of the shading on the back and neck, and define the shading on the paws and the haunch. 23:15, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Why are the legs farthest from us lighter than the rest of the body? 23:31, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I colorpicked from the StarClan image and checked again and it is the right base color. And in my reupload I couldn't seem to get rid of the waste so can somebody who knows GIMP tell me how? -- 23:38, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Not to state the obvious, but there's lots of waste around the whole thingBroken_Foot

Well for GIMP, go to your lineart layer, fill the outside of the lineart in red, and then use the color select tool to select the red. Then, erase the red, then go to your shading layer and erase the waste there (make your brush super big, for it to get it all). It works on any layer, actually. Also, define the light. This really does look darker than the star, unless you picked from an area that was shaded on it.

There's leaking shading along the back and a bit on the hind leg closest to us. Also, define the shading on the tail, and the light on the front legs. 23:52, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little 00:23, 4/01/2017

Reups --  00:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's a lot of gaps in the earpink--can you fix that? 00:52 4/1/17 (UTC)

Reups --  01:29, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur the lighting (if the lighter parts on the <-- side are lighting, I'm tired) and earpink and possibly match the eye color a bit better? 01:50, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink some more and define the shading and shading depth some more. ~Patch   feather~   13:27, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  15:47, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading around the head and hind legs a little and smooth it out. ~Patch   feather~   16:46, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  17:05, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back paws and near the flank and define the light on the front legs. ~Patch   feather~   18:13, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

So this are the main colors I used for the StarClan image; the base color is 757575, then for the shading mainly 454545, for earpink A59090. 18:24, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the colors! c: --  20:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

smooth the lighting more 22:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

The eye colour is still quite different. 23:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:28, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Make the lineart black. 03:34, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reups --  15:22, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there's still color leaking onto the lineart 17:51, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I tried..but I don't know how to fix that. --  18:24, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try just replacing the lineart layer; some parts look dark gray. Overlapping the lineart layer should fix any problems like that. Also, smooth the paler parts, because this image shouldn't have any, and it kinda looks like it does. Besides that, define the light on both front legs and round out the shading on the rump.

Reups I tried to replace the lineart but that one turned dark gray too. I know it's because of the shading but I don't know how to stop the shading from coloring the lineart. ._. --  18:39, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

The layer with your lineart should be the topmost layer, or second topmost depending on how you do your eyes and stuff. Basically, the lineart should be above the base pelt, shading, highlights, ect.

Reups I tried to erase some of the color on the lineart. --  18:47, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit 20:49, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  21:54, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smooth it out.

Reups Now I have a feeling it's too dark :c --  01:58, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Fox, you need to really smooth out the shading everywhere.Broken_Foot

Shading's also leaking away from the lineart a little bit on the foreleg closest to us and on his underbelly (unless the underbelly was intentional?). 20:50, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading depth. 02:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

where's his pupil? 19:02, 4/06/2017

Still working?

His pupil is on the left side of his eye. --  23:06, April 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * No, there needs to be a pupil visible in the eye. Look at some other warrior images for reference. The eye is just the blank model for the warrior image. 15:22, 4/08/2017

Eye style is artist's choice. I can see it and I know it's there. It's fine, and you're being picky. I've even made warrior images with eyes like this in the past.

Reups --  20:04, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading overall, I really can hardly make it out. 23:51, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:59, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 00:01, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit imo

Reups --  00:17, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's gray leaking all over the lineart, please make sure it's black. I also think you could define shading depth, and maybe lighten the shading on the legs, it looks like his legs are darker than the rest of his body 00:36, April 10, 2017 (UTC)


 * Make sure what's black; the shading? Shading tint is artist's choice. Also no to the lightening the shading on the legs, get rid of some of the shading on the legs, to define the light source. Define the shading everywhere else as well. 02:01, 4/10/2017

Plumclaw (Q) - For Approval
Lol this is my first queen and I suck at shading. (If cats know about apples and plums, what about peaches?)

Add some shading to the face? 23:09, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the two back legs 23:21, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. I can barely see it. ErmineGlow (talk) 23:42, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

The belly shading should stop at the elbow and round up. If it doesn't stop there, it kinda looks like the belly extends over the forearm, if that makes sense. Also, define the light on the front legs. 00:18, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Accidentally used the smudge tool instead of the blur, lol im too unfocused.

Define the light on the tail, and I actually believe you should curve the shading onto the top of the head, if you're using the source I think you are. Someone correct me if I'm mistaken, but I've seen a lot of queen images done and I think this source calls for shading on the top, even if it's just a bit.

Smooth out the belly shading?

re-up This is hard! Also I really don't want to fiddle with the tail that much, but I did. The reason is because this is a skinny tail, and it's kind of a small space to work with. Very frustrating.

Smooth the shading on her belly some more; i totally understand, i did my first queen and it was hard. And define the light on her back paw that's closest to us. 19:33, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-up short-furred cats are hard

I can't see the <-- earpink well. I know it's shading, but can you lighten it or the shading on it so it's easier to see?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:32, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

re-up meowp. ..

With your source, there should be at least a little shading at the bottom of the chest, and also the shading on the <-- front leg should extend up a tad higher to define the shoulder shape.

re-up sorry for the wait i usually upload way quicker than this.

Define the shading depth on the front two paws/legs, and the shading is leaking away from the lineart a tad on the bottom of the chest

re-up

CBA?

Sorry, but could you define the stomach shading a bit? It looks rather flat compared to the rest of the image.

Honeyleaf (Q) ~ For Approval
Can't get the stripes right >:( Also, wasn't sure if I should put "For Evaluation" or "For Approval 23:55, April 4, 2017 (UTC)

Nah it can be For Approval, since you've got your first image approved already.

Define the shading depth. :) This is great for your second image. 00:03, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Your sig is changing the words below it. can you fix that?

nvm

Reuploaded Shading depth defined. And I know, I wanted to make my sig bigger but it also made the timestamp big so.. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 00:35, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thicken the stripes on the front legs? They are a bit thicker on the other images. 00:58, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs, define the shading on the front leg farthest from us. 01:00, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Her stripe pattern doesn't really seem to match her other imageBroken_Foot

I think it does. 01:43, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I kinda agree that the stripes don't look great, I think they're more swirly on the loner image but it's just hard to copy on this blank also I'm new at this   04:22, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, they're pretty curvy on the loner image. If you're not sure how it was made, Scarlet is still active from time to time and I'm sure she could give you an idea from where to go. She's the one who made that pattern.

Reuploaded I didn't talk to Scarlet yet but I tried to make the body stripes better 21:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:34, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:32, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define her paler parts a bit more, and I don't think the earpink really matches the loner. Also, the stripes should be more swirly on the <-- haunch/leg and the <-- side of the back.

Reuploaded I actually colorpicked from the loner but it's hard to tell what part is earpink and what part is fur so this time I colorpicked from the deputy. About the swirliness of the stripes.. I wasn't exactly sure exactly where you were talking about but I think I fixed the trouble areas 00:21, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading 17:50, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:52, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back, and on the --> side of the cat some, most especially the chest

Reuploaded There isn't supposed to be any light on the chest really, but I blurred the shading and it looks lighter so there ya go 00:11, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

In your source, there would be light on the chest. Also lessen some of the facial shading, and add some light to the under-the-tummy back leg 02:02, 4/10/2017

Running Fox (Kit) - For Approval
Remember the first time I tried charart and it was this one and it was actually awful because I had no idea what I was doing? I do. 17:41, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad? I remember. Your Chararts have gotten better :DBroken_Foot

Maybe smooth out the shading on his chest a bit? 19:34, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

reups 19:38, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

can you desaturate the patches?

reups 20:18, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Get rid of the light by the belly, there wouldn't be any there. 15:21, 4/08/2017

reups There wasn't any light there in the first place?? I defined the shading a bit so hopefully you can see it. 17:32, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, wait, if you mean the little circle by the ---> arm, that's the same on a lot of kit images and it goes with the light source. If you did mean the actually belly, then ignore this lol 17:34, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ---> front leg a bit. 22:49, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

reups 01:02, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

I really like this. Maybe define the shading depth just a touch? 16:53, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

reups Shading is so weird with these tiny little kit blanks 17:25, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 23:54, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any way you could alter the coloring for the base somehow? I honestly can't tell that and the spots apart, and it looks more like a solid. And before you say anything, I checked on all three screens I have.

Whiteclaw (Ki) - For Approval
Here we go! 22:27, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 22:38, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

The paw isn't done exactly the way it is in the other images.

Reuploaded I also darken the shading because why not. 23:05, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth it more, define the shading depth, and smudge the ear pink. 23:39, April 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:11, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

It still needs to be smoothed out. Also the paw needs to be blurred a bit.

Reuploaded  01:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more, and expand it on the --> side about chest height. And, the shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart on the --> side of the cat.

Define earpink a bit, the white paw still doesn't look quite right.. maybe smudge it? Also there's a white pixel on the white paw haha 01:00, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

I think you need to add more shading. Excuse me I repeated someone's comment x3 Also, Snow, I don't think it was..nessacary(probably spelled that wrong) to add the "haha" to the end of your scentence.Broken_Foot


 * Broken, it's fine, as long as it wasn't "attacking" the artist. As for the image, add more shading to the belly area where there is none, that is not where light should be shining. 15:15, 4/08/2017

Reuploaded I changed the shading 19:22, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some^^

Reuploaded 20:48, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the white paw could be smudged a little bit, and the shading could be smoothed more, especially on the tail 00:26, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:28, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed paw shading. 18:04, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the --> front paw?

Reuploaded 19:59, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The part of the white paw that has no shading on it looks rather sharp, could you smude/blur it a bit? 00:40, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:14, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
Shading is annoying. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed out and define the dark splotch on her ear?Broken_Foot

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 17:52, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth shading some more and define it on the legs? 19:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:41, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little more, define the light on the legs and tail. 20:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:42, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little. Also, I think the belly shading should extend further ---> way, towards where the haunch overlaps the underbelly. 22:24, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a bit? 23:40, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you move the splotch more on the ear and define it? It kind of blends in with the shading on the side of the head 01:10, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:54, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on both front legs and the back one farthest from us, and smooth out the shading a bit? 17:41, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's a little piece on the belly near the hips where the shading is missing. 22:47, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the belly and a little way above the base of the tail 00:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit dark.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:10, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the <-- front leg near the lineart. 14:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The waste is still there :/ and I think shading could be lightened and smoothed some more  15:06, April 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * The shading darkness is fine, Snow. But I do agree on the smoothing of it 02:05, 4/10/2017

Foxy(Ro) ~ For Approval
Might dull down the bright red, but here's Foxy :P Also, I know the stripes might blend a bit with the shading, and I'll work something outBroken_Foot

Yeah, dull him down quite a bit; he looks too neon. Also, smooth out the shading a bit, and make the paws and tail-tip a bit creamier; at first, I thought they were white. 21:34, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! What is lifeBroken_Foot

He still looks neon imo 21:59, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! I think this is going to be as much as I'm willing to darken him before he turns into a normal shade of red, not bright redBroken_Foot

Smooth out the tail shading a bit? 23:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think the tail shading is fine, so, second opinion?Broken_Foot

I think it could stand to be smoothed out a bit. Also, he looks stop sign red, so maybe you should fix that.

Re-uploaded! This is as much as I'm willing to darken himBroken_Foot

It looks like there's a pixel leaking onto the lineart at the top of the ear closest to us, and could you darken the nose a little bit? It looks almost white to me 01:18, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Well thenBroken_Foot

Tweaked some wasteBroken_Foot

There is more waste beneat the tail 03:40, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! How could I not have seen that omlBroken_Foot

Um I know you've said that's all you were willing to darken him but cats described like him like Flamenose are a bit more toned down. imo he still looks neon.

Re-uploaded! StarClan, I think this is a better shade. I think if I make it any darker,he wouldn't be bright red anymoreBroken_Foot

He still looks really neon.

Re-uploaded!Broken_Foot

Could you possibly make the pale paws a little more on the red spectrum? Right now they're looking to be a tan color, and that does not look right on a red cat 15:18, 4/08/2017

Not exactly sure what you mean by that, but I'll try to make them blend a bit betterBroken_Foot

Re-uploaded! Fiddled around with the brightness and suchBroken_Foot

Ohhhh, *sees description* lool sorry about that. I thought it was just pale parts. But still move them a little more to the red/orange/yellow spectrum, they look really desaturated right now and kind of gray-cream, which isn't what it's supposed to be :P <span style="">16:26, 4/08/2017

Re-uploaded! I'm horrible at getting cream colorsBroken_Foot

Are there supposed to be two cream parts on the tail? Or should that other part be connected to the tip? 00:22, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

It's the tailtip :DBroken_Foot

if alderheart couldn't have that on his tail, neither should this. 15:03, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! This was a pain to figure outBroken_Foot

There's some waste below the tail. Cute! :) 23:00, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Thank you Shypaw! I think I got itBroken_Foot

Might just be me, but the nose looks kinda bright 00:45, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Quietkit (Star) - CBA
22:55, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's a little bit of the pale chest leaking onto the <-- front leg

Re-uploaded. 23:04, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Nice job, Ivy! She's very cute :D It looks like there is some waste above the tail tip, some waste below the tail on the butt, and a speck where the tail meets the body on the topBroken_Foot

The eye colour and nose colour are off :) 23:07, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The nose color does match - I literally colorpicked it. The reason the eyes may have been off is because I added intermediate values (having three vastly different colors right next to each other works on a tiny blank, but not on eyes this size), but I did change on the colors a bit. 23:22, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

noice, CBA? <span style="">15:19, 4/08/2017

The eyes look gray to me imo Rainbowmistake (talk) 00:08, April 9, 2017 (UTC)rainbow

I don't think that's a good enough critique to break CBA with, because the eye color was colorpicked Rainbow :/Broken_Foot

Re-uploaded. I fooled around with it for a minute, but the eye color is the exact three hex codes used by the kit. I honestly don't think the color is gray, but regardless, I have to match the kit. 00:22, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Re-CBA?

Nami (K) ~ CBA


Blur the stripes a little more 23:07, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm the OA of the kittypet (first one), and the stripes are not blurred. They are smudged slightly, but they are pretty solid. <span style="">23:14 Fri Apr 7

I'll probably keep the stripes as is, then, since I did only slightly smudge them to match.

I apologize if I'm mistaken (and if I am, feel free to correct me), but if you look at her kittypet and loner images, isn't it <--- leg which mostly has stripes on it and ---> leg that is covered mostly with a white patch? Because the opposite seems to be true here. 20:55, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded think so, yeah^^

Comments before approval? 22:23, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Lapping Wave (Ki) - For Approval
I forgot how frustrating these kit blanks are. 23:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth?

Reups 15:14, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

I like this. CBA? 16:58, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any way possible that you could smooth out or smudge the stripes? I have seen countless images have the style of stripes that this image has, and then they end up being redone or tweaked not long after they're approved. Plus, waves aren't usually this.. pointed. They're kinda smooth and I guess you could say they resemble more of a hill?

Applefur (TF) (Star) - For Approval
Too bad Beebs isn't here anymore >.< Its been a while since I've matched one of her patterns lol <span style="">23:34 Sat Apr 8

Me has forgotten what "TF" has stood for lol. Define shading? I can barely see it though it's probably because of the speckles.

Expand the shading on the chest. 02:03, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

I believe the mottled spots on the warrior image are a bit bigger than the ones here. 14:14, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's as much as I am expanding it. <span style="">22:48 Sun Apr 9

Smooth out the shading? 22:53, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">00:19 Mon Apr 10

Marshpaw (App) - For Approval
I have computer troubles...this took me forever. Patience :) Also this is my first attempt at a cat with tabby stripes...hope they look alright 05:32, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's a waste pixel a little ways away from the ---> side of the head, also maybe define the stripes a bit? 05:38, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can see the stripes fine. They're under shading and in a small area. Second opinion? 05:39, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Okay, cut it out with the second opinion stuff. It happens far too much. Of course you know they're there; it's your image.

Reuploaded 06:04, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

This is amazing. Smooth out the shading on the shoulder and head a bit? 14:14, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:25, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Wildkit (RC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
sometimes you have to be some kind of idiot and reuse a design you don't even have the file for anymore 22:21, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Make it a bit more bluish?