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Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o  ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either.

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  -  Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 20:09, 10/24/2014

Re-uploaded - I tried x3 -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll work on it, in a few hours. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

You see the shading that's on...uh, I want to say the lower back? Pretty sure that's what that is... can you smooth that out a bit? I'm not sure the smudges should be so visible.

Re-uploaded - shshsh-ading, dun dun dun. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  10:49, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy on the tail. 11:00 Mon Oct 27

It actually looks blotchy all over^^ give it all a little blur or smudge over..whichever you do. 22:37, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Should be slightly better but it may appear blotchy because that's how I shade... ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:16, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Try using Gaussian blur (if you don't already/don't blur shading) 1:33 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

Re-uploaded - I do use Gaussian blur, but I did it on this one, but the shading messed up. So I've tried to blur it as much as I can without messing it up. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

What opacity are you blurring on? For blurring shading I usually just put it on 100(the highest setting on GIMP). Blur it some more. If you were not already, try blurring on 100 opacity. 13:28, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

I blur it on 30. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred with opacity on 100 before turning it back down to 30. Hopefully I can master this. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's looking good! Define the tail shading some more. 03:59, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the shading on the haunch and face could use more blurring/smudging. 12:46, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I never realized what a pain, shading on solid cats was. In the future I think I'll stick to tabbies and such. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  13:17, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

oOPS, i'll fix the face later ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   13:19, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on this ---> paw and blur the shading on this <--- paw. 14:32, November 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out. 3:03 PM, Sun Nov 2, 2014

Re-uploaded - the gaussian blur is everywhere -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:45, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the light on the paws. 20:26, 11/4/2014

Re-uploaded - This shading is KILLING ME xD -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   20:35, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste by (her) left paw, and the shading is leaking from the lineart a bit on the side. 22:15, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - You must have eagle vision, I couldn't even see it until I squinted.. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   16:34, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add a highlight onto the left shoulder, the shading there looks a bit strange with the way the lights going. Also, can you define the tail shading a bit? Brick  The Bite of '87  17:17, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - DUN, I swear if someone tells me to tweak the shading I'll scream. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:37, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is looking a little blotchy; try either blurring/smudging it to smooth it out a bit? Also, there should be more shading on the face, and the tail and paw's shading could be defined a bit. im sorry. -- 22:32, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, first of I uploaded an old file stupid me, second of all I'll work on it tomorrow and finally I am screaming   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:33, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the nose pink, so I suggest putting some nose pink. 02:54, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Actually tiger, s/he shouldn't put any nosepink on this image. It's a black (Well, dark gray) cat. They usually have black noses. 13:36, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - more screaming I couldn't find the old file (probably didn't save it) scrapped the shading and re-did it; the changes are here - http://oi60.tinypic.com/103h6wy.jpg   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   17:09, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and strengthen the shading on the paws. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:17, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened shading, strengthened paw shading (made it darker there) and I changed the position of the eyes, which I think have made quite the difference. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   11:38, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm.. define the tail shading. Also, I think the area near the nearest leg has receding shading. 20:18, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Defined tail shading, and expanded shading on nearest leg. Think I'm getting the hang of shading... — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   11:06, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

The shading seems to be bleeding away from the edge of the belly. Maybe smudge it back towards the line? Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:57, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on the left front leg is blotchy, smooth it out a little? 15:52 Tue Nov 11

Withdrawing because of work. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   21:58, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I'll take over. I changed the heading for you :)  17:23 Thu Nov 13

Reups 18:05 Thu Nov 13

Lighten the shading, and possibly blur it. I spy a tiny bit of shading leaking from the lineart on the bottom of the side. 22:18, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 16:50 Fri Nov 14

Lighten up the shading on the flank and define the light on the tail. 16:15 Sun Nov 16

Reups 16:52 Sun Nov 16

Lighten the shading on the back and tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Just popping in to warn you that your monthly limit's almost up! 21:28 Tue Nov 18

Snake (DotC) (Alt Ro) ~ For Approval
I don't like how this came out. =P -- 01:21, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

It looks fine don't beat yourself up lol. Define the texture a little, and define your lightsource. The head is telling me it's coming from one direction, and the body another, and the tail another. 12:59, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Texture is fine. 20:27, 11/6/2014

Texture looks alright to me, though it could be darkened a smidge. I agree about the lightsource though. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:29, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think if you just removed the shading along the back (but left a bit behind the head near the neck) that the light source would be fine. 20:32, 11/6/2014

Re upped  01:05, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

blur/smudge/whatever you do the shading on the neck and belly a bit 21:18, 11/9/2014

Reupped 22:20, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading.

Define the light on the face - liking the texture! 16:31, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped 23:19, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Hm, correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't there also be shading on parts of his back? Like, near his tail and extending a little more past the neck? I could be wrong, and if I am, I'm sorry. Also, please define the light on the legs; I don't think they'd all be in shade.

Re upped I defined the light on the legs. I didn't change the shading because I did that and other users said it made the light source confusing. 00:16, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Fair enough, Tiger. I'd rather you go with the majority opinion on this. Maybe define the shading a bit more on the legs? I know it's there, but it's kinda hard to see it- like maybe have an unblurred part of shading on a lower opacity, kinda like what I did for the legs on Rippleclaw's warrior. If you're unsure of what I mean and if I'm making no sense, I will gladly explain and provide examples. It looks like the shading is overblurred in some spots, mainly on the feet, and it looks like it takes up a bit more space than it should, and in the case of the frontmost least visible back leg, (god that was phrased so nicely, I apologize- I've been killing Geth for the past four hours and my brain is fried) the shading looks like it could be receding.

Re upped I redid the shading in the legs. If the shading is still odd, can I have some examples please? Thank you. 01:43, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped I redid the entire shading, with help from Breeze. Thanks Breeze. 02:34, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

One last re up 03:00, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe blur around the unshaded circle on their side or give it a tiny tad of shading, or both. It's just blinking at me.--Stealthfire star (talk) 05:20, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the circle: wider and taller. Also define the depth of the shading, it's looking a bit flat. 14:08, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Littlebird (Star) - CBA
Her name is cute:3 Changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/141112C/ezimba12232517187600.png 20:51, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

haha I wanted this. define the tail shading. This is lovely! =) 20:58, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on both visible front paws, please.

Re-ups Thanks Frosty:) 15:10, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I thought Fuzzywing had her reserved? (still a good charart though ^^) 15:42, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Fuzzywing's reservation expired I believe ^^ I think Sziri's alright. 20:43, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Yup, Darkfrost is correct. I had actually removed that the other day (or yesterday, I can't remember), I believe. They got one week from the reservation date, but they hadn't posted, so their reservation expired. Hmm, now to the image.. could you still define the shading on <-- visible front paw, please?

Define the shading on the chest? — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:01, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 16:42, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight/shading near the neck- it appears a tad too sharp, so if you wouldn't mind smoothing that out, then I think we could even CBA this. I quite like it and the image is looking beautiful.

Re-ups Thank you!:) Also,when will i become a warrior?I have more than 3 pictures approved. 19:42, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

...right now. IDK why you aren't a warrior already. 07:32, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 11:02, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

So sorry, I meant to say this the other day but I got busy. Could you lighten/blur the lower chest shading where it is darkest? It's that darker spot on the chest. It throws off the color of the pale chest a bit. 13:53, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I don't see how it's throwing the color off. It looks fine to me, and I think we're gonna continue the CBA.

Tallpoppy (Star) ~ For Approval
eh..colorpicked from elder. Comments? 23:27, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the main part of the body. Also give more depth to the eyes and smudge the ear pink into the ear a bit more.

The shading is throwing off the color a little bit; could you lighten it a tad? If you'd prefer not too, thats fine with me. 23:39, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Lol wow I just realized you all were staring at the old version of the image for 24 hrs. I'm so sorry, I didn't notice that mine didn't overwrite the prev. version. I tried re-uploading it and here's a link to ezimba for my version. 13:15, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Yours had been showing, and my comment still stands about the ear pink- please smudge it a bit more.

Well they hadn't for me. I'll re-upload later if I've got time. Is the shading better? I had changed it after you commented but then I saw the old version when I got on so I'd thought you were looking at the old. 14:43, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I think the shading should actually extend the rest of the way, like to where the base of the tail is. I've never seen a source that looks like that put up for approval.

I'll re-upload in the morning or in the evening. Sorry, I've just been really busy. 08:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope that's better. And yeah I like making up new sources when I have a little time to mess around..lol 12:42, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad, especially around the top part of the back and the tail. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:39, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'll lighten it on the back, but I think the tail is fine unless someone says otherwise. I always define the tail shading on shorthairs a little more than the rest of the body so it's not flat. And so the light and shading are perfectly visible. 13:49, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Purdy (K) ~ For Approval
He's so adorable~  Anyways, he probably doesnt match stripe-wise, but eh. Couldnt get ahold of any of his files. But have a Purdykit c: 23:09, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the mottles, please? I can't see them at all, while they're very distinctive and noticeable on his other images.

Re-uploaded. 21:34, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Maybe lighten the shading a tad, I know it's a small but cute image but I can barely see the brown color at some spots. --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:24, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Hailstar (K) ~ For Evaluation
He's so cute :). Burntclaw (talk) 09:03, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded couldn't find the xcf file for it so I had to redraw it :/Burntclaw (talk) 09:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Hum... The shading seems a bit misplaced, there is some shading on his left cheek. Correct me if I'm wrong. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:04, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. By the way, I accidentally used my sister's account to re-upload the picture, so it will say it has been re-uploaded by The Fox Girl. Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups removed some waste.

Darken the base coat a tad, and define the light on the legs. <span style="">12:56 Sun Nov 16

Re-uploaded I'm pretty sure the coat color was fine... Cause I color picked from his apprentice version, but I darkened it like you said so. I also defined the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 13:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. <span style="">13:13 Sun Nov 16

Just removed it as soon as I realized after the re upload :'D Burntclaw (talk) 13:16, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy, smooth it out? <span style="">13:17 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups. Is it better? Burntclaw (talk) 13:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

It still looks rather blotchy; you can try blurring it with the blur tool at rate 100 instead of using gaussian blur, and it's causing some of the shading to recede at the lineart. I can't see where your light source is, either. Also, there's waste all around the image. <span style="">16:22 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups Completely re-did the shading. Never realized shading was so complicated :'D. Also removed all of the waste. Burntclaw (talk) 04:11, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's still waste The Fox Girl (talk) 04:30, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Burntclaw (talk) 05:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Give the shading a good blur/smudge. Look at examples of other solid coloured cats for help. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure if I overdid it. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more, and define it in the legs. Also, every time you do something, make sure to select outside the lineart and erase on every layer, because there's still waste. 07:14, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I hope changes are showing, because the internet is being weird again. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make the eyes look a bit more yellow, like his Starclan image? Brick  The Bite of '87  15:50, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the eyes are fine, can you get rid of the waste and define the shading a tad please. <span style="">16:01 Mon Nov 17

Re-ups Not sure if I got ridden of all the waste Burntclaw (talk) 04:01, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Getting rid of all the waste can be a pain with long-furs. Zoom in really close to find it all. It's a smaller image so it won't be much of a hustle. Look especially around the spiky parts of the fur, there is one pixel wastes hiding there. Also, can you darken the shading slightly? --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:29, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure I've gotten rid of all the waste. Just worried that changes aren't showing because of my internet -_-. Also darkened the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 05:56, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got it! Now, the shading is leaking away from the lineart, meaning it's not right next to the lineart. Even one pixel off is noticeable. Try even moving the shading to the right or carefully add more shading so it will be alined. --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:17, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I fixed the problem. XD Burntclaw (talk) 06:27, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got his left shoulder, can you do the same with the rest of shading? The rest of his side, legs and tail I think where it needs work.--Stealthfire star (talk) 06:34, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Jeez, I didn't know shading was so complicated! :D Pretty sure I got this right. Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I think with solid cats is especially focused. It's still leaking away from the lineart. Look really closely to see the gaps. Look at other pictures for examples. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:25, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 07:32, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Much better! At his side, lighten the shading slightly and make sure there is shading on his spiked fur and all his back paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:40, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I spy a little waste at his side The Fox Girl (talk) 12:18, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I made things worse -_- Also, accidentaly used my sister's account to reupload it again :/ Burntclaw (talk) 13:23, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Naw. It's fine, as an artist never doubt yourself, believe in your own work. I've been an artist(in real life. on here for only a couple of years) for many years, first thing I had to learn was to believe in my painting or drawing or even my image on here. Now that I've done my pep talk xD, it looks like the shading is receding from the lineart on the tail, and the back especially. If you add more shading along the lineart it'll fix right up. =) 14:04, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Graywing (WC) (Ancient Tribe) ~ For Approval
[http://oi61.tinypic.com/2ugyjy8.jpg Jayce said I could have this. Not that proud of the shading but whatever.] 19:17, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I spy a tiny bit of waste by (his) left ear. He's beeauutiful 19:29, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

reups thanks! 19:33, November 18, 2014 (UTC)