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Poppydawn (Q) - Redone
OA was Sandstar12. Her color was incorrect, again on the list to be redone. I tried a slightly different angle as to where the light source is coming from. Comments for improvement? 18:44, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! Can you define the shoulder highlight/shading and blur the tail shading? 22:56, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:03, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading? 11:57, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

She should be a tiny bit redder. 01:47, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Colors taken off her warrior. 15:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Also Reuploaded 15:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

If you look at the three images side by side, yours is a little bit oranger than the others. You don't have to change it if you don't want to, but if you don't change it now, it could be tweaked again in the future. Just a suggestion. 17:17, November 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * shrug* It looks the same to me but I guess I can  17:36, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed to have stripes. OA was Sandstar12. 02:44 Wed Nov 9

Darken the shading & brighten the highlights(if you use them) - 03:02, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't use highlights, but darkened shading. 22:47 Wed Nov 9

Darken the shading just a tad more? -- 23:38, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable. 02:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Wild? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, yes, I'm still working on this, but I'm on Vancouver Island and can't access my files. I'll probably be able to reupload this on Monday. 22:41 Sun Nov 13

Reuploaded 23:50 Mon Nov 14

Hawkfoot (Q) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be fixed. OA was Hawkfire I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:11, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Paleclaw! Define the shading a little bit on the tail. 03:18, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Might as well define the shadiing on the whole image a bit - 21:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  04:35, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I can barely see it. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - This is looking pretty much redone. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  13:23, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, trust me, I tried. Sorry, but I can't blur it anymore. D: ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:29, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Rosepetal (W) - Redone
Redone to be dark cream without stripes. 00:41, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

OA was Flamingomom, and the color is from Daisy. 00:42, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, it's very blotchy. 146.115.179.113 00:48, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the earpink. 00:49, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes might not be showing. 00:51, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Another stole my reservation. >.> I am sorry but I reserved this first, and I even checked the revision history. It is not fair to me. 01:05, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. Would you mind if I did this, or would you rather do it yourself? I know what it feels like when someone steals my reservation, but I also know what it feels like to do a charart that takes a long time, put a lot of effort into it, and have to decline it, but it is yours, so if you want, I'll remove it. 01:09, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, I can't make you remove it, it would make me guilty, umm, keep doing it, it looks great! ^^ 01:12, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :3 You can do her kit version if you want, I won't reserve it. 01:14, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely, thicken and darken the shading. 18:41, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a little green on my computer... maybe make her a tad more cream? 03:08, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not changing the color; its from Daisy. Re-Uploaded. 22:49, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

She looks kinda green on mine, too. She needs to be more cream. 00:29 Tue Nov 15

Flowerstar (W)- tweaked
I forgot I had to do this one too. So anywhoo I did the same thing as her leader image, burned in stripes. Commentss? - 19:00, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the 'M' on her forehead. 19:35, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -I just realized, I posted this up on 11-11-11 at 11:00AM. Holy craap 8D - 19:49, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I know you weren't called to do this, but can you blur the shading? It's very hard edged. 20:53, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the chest. 00:12, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feet shading still needs to be darkened. 00:26 Tue Nov 15

Oh, and she needs a torn ear as well. 00:34 Tue Nov 15

Clawface (W) - Tweaked
OA was Sandy, tweaked by Maplepool. The shading was really oddly placed, so I redid that. The scars were also oddly coloured, so I tweaked those. And the earpink looked off to me, so I tweaked that as well. There was also blurred lineart on his ear :3 04:23, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! Can you make the earpink and scars the same color though? It's up to you which color you use, but they should match. Also, any chance of you trying to add some shading to the scars? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:25, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! :) It kind of looks like he's bleeding now, though O_O And I added shading to the scars, but it's really hard to tell because they're so thin. 04:38, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm.... I absolutely luv the way you made the scars, but they seem kind of...dark? Idk, perhaps lighten earpink and the scars, or maybe just the edges.... Eh, whatever you want to do. :3 04:43, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Clawyy <3 Could you blur the shading near the haunch a little more? 17:18, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Now this I like :D 17:20, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink and maybe make the scars a paler pink color to make them look old. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:16, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, blur it, and blur the shading. 22:58 Sun Nov 13

Thin out the shading on the tail and on the neck. Also maybe make the scars thicker and blur it maybe? You dont have to, just a suggestion/ - 01:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'd rather not change the scars. 00:57, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Timberfur (D) - Redone
I'm surprised no-one re-did him yet. Original artist was Mousetalon, and he needed to be longhaired. 18:34, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make him greying? It says in his page that he is. 18:47, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't sure if his whole body was greying, so I just added a greying muzzle. 18:54, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'd maybe define the muzzle more and maybe make it lighter. 00:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:19, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pupil? 02:43, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

There's a pupil >_>. There was a discussion about it, and it was agreed this eye style was okay. 02:52, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the earpink. 00:23 Tue Nov 15

Reuploaded 01:24, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

River (Lo) - Redone
I have been simply dying to see this one redone. Two pieces of prey with one blow. Loner and one of the founding leaders. OA was Insane. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:42, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Erased the waste around the back. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:52, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 03:13, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 15:06, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Now it's blotchy... If you use GIMP, I suggest using Gaussian Blur instead of the Smudge Tool. It makes it look a lot better :) 16:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I use photoshop. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. - 23:21, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

And blur it :3 00:22 Tue Nov 15

Sunstar (D) - Tweaked
Ripped his ear. OA is Insaneular, then given yellow eyes by Ivystripe. Sky-Stupidly Spring...✿ 03:11, November 13, 2011 (UTC

Blur the shading a lot. 06:26, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur the shading without ruining the other stuff. Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 12:05, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart on the tear. 14:06, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 01:51, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Archeye (W) - Tweaked
I dont know if its redone or tweaked, I redoned stripes and shadings.. OA was Insaneular.. Leaf-storm,14:11,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Ups, changes arent showing Leaf-storm,14:13,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Why is the lineart in between his haunch and his tail gone? 16:08, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That's the old version. 16:21, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

i dont like when changes arent showing Leaf-storm,16:48,November 13,2011 (UTC)

I know it wasn't on the list, but could you make the ear-pink less purple. 22:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

It was on the list Leaf-storm,12:57,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Reupladed, late, sorry I wasn't on my computer before Leaf-storm,13:38,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and shading. <span style="">00:21 Tue Nov 15

Brokenstar (E) ~ Tweaked
Lineart Fail, but I honestly didn't think this needed to be redone. OA was Scarletwind tweaked by Moonflight, and it needed ragged fur and a flattened muzzle. 14:31, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! I see nothing wrong :) 16:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Personally, I think his fur would look a bit more like his father's. Other than that, look great. 00:26, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:50, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The black around the eye needs to be fixed. It's not all outlined. 23:16, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Its supposed to be like taht - 23:20, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) - Tweaked
Blurred shadings and added some more, OA is Bramble Leaf-storm,14:53,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the shading on her paws. 16:22, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:30,November 13,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the neck shading and lighten the shading on the middle of the haunch. Blur all shading. <span style="">22:59 Sun Nov 13

Next comment will be blur the shadings more yes? I do it..but I dont have much time now Leaf-storm,13:46,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Did you reupload the image? Also, try to match the shading to this tutorial about shading 'cause right now the shading doesn't make much sense. <span style="">00:18 Tue Nov 15

Poolcloud (Q) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow, and the shading and markings needed to be redone. 18:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink and blur the patches a lot. 19:44, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink and patches look fine to me, darken the shading a little bit - 19:47, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the patches look a tad prickly. Blur it a little bit. The whole ear looks pink, define the edges of it. Looking good =) 21:31, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thats how she does the earpink XD - 21:41, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno the earpink looks... off. I don't think it should fill the whole ear. <span style="">23:00 Sun Nov 13

The earpink filling the whole ear is epic. Blur the shading on the tail. -- 01:25, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yep, that's how I do the earpink and I'm not changing it. I did it for Wind and it turned out fine. 00:52, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Smudge it into the ear some more, then. <span style="">01:37 Tue Nov 15

Aspentail (W) - Tweaked
Added longer tail. Original artist was Sandy, redone by Scarlet. Comments? Elorisa  18:24, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks a little odd... When I added it to the list, I pictured it being expanded at the middle, so that it was roughly the same shape, but longer. Make sense? 18:28, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded; Better? ''' Elorisa   18:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, perfect :) 18:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tip of the tail a bit pointier and erase the waste around the tail. <span style="">22:45 Sun Nov 13

Leafpool (Ki)- Redone
She needed to match the other images... OA was Darkhallows. Constructiments? 19:32, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her paws a bit. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 00:36, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) ~ Redone
Needed long hair and OA was Icethroat21. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:00, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

You need to upload it over Dawnflower's elder image, I believe. :3 22:23, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Debating whether I should do that or not when I was uploading it... I'll switch it right now. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   23:38, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and lighten the haunch shading. 01:09, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

And redden the earpink. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Green" >Sky-Stupidly <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="pink"> Spring...✿ 01:55, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading and fixed the haunch shading and reddened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   02:01, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pink looks hot pink-ish. 17:25, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:05, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Rock (Ro) - Redone
I guess I changed my mind. Original artist was Moonflight, and it needed to be more brown. 01:08, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and theres some waste between his back legs. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:22, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wait for changes... 21:33, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 23:00, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:07, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Is the tip of the tail meant to have a point like that? I don't remember one being on there on the CG, but maybe I'm just forgetting. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:30, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Raggedstar (W) ~ Redone
Okay, OA is Hollytail, with a tweak by Scarlet. You have no clue how proud I am to have made this image. 22:40, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I am proud of you too xD The ear-pink looks like a circle. A pink circle xD 22:58, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I suck at ear pink. 23:04, November 14, 2011 (UTC).

So awesome! But his description says he has patchy fur, which was on the tweak nomination page as something needing to be done. Also, I think since he was apparently so ragged that he was named for it, his lineart should be similar to Fuzzypelt's. 23:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not making the image like Fuzzypelt's. I'm sorry, but that would take way too long for me to even attempt to do it, and it would ruin what I have. I'll make the fur patchy, but that's about it. 23:44, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, like Thistleclaw's then? I dunno, it just seems like it would actually enhance the image to me. 23:46, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do. Thistleclaw's is a little more realistic, and easier for me to mimic. xD 23:48, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

His eye colour is white... 01:18, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know. I fixed it. The layer I keep the eye on was invisible. 01:19, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, that's some brightly coloured skin he's got there. Desaturate it a lot. 01:32, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I've never done a patched cat before. If you have a better color for me to use, please, let me know. 01:38, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Broken Shadow (SC) ~ Redone
OA was Nightfall, and I redid it to match her queen version. 00:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. <span style="">01:36 Tue Nov 15