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Bluebellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I hate the shading. I couldn't get it to look right.

Hm..have you looked at the shading placement on the tutorial page? I have it pulled up and the shading for that is actually on the right side of the kitten image having the light source come from the left. Maybe try using that as an example. For an admin, this needs renamed to File:Bluebellkit.kit.png — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 03:17, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

that's only a general guide. there's multiple usable sources, and this source is fine. 06:19, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the neck shading and define the light on the tail

It's a little hard to tell since the image is so small, but I think I spy a bit of waste next to that right front paw. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:23, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded *Face palm* Shading still looks weird.

No, it doesn't. Just smooth it out a little bit near the edges of it and you'll be just fine. Also, be sure to sign with four ~'s, as you haven't been leaving a timestamp with your messages. You have a signature, but I can't tell what time you left said message, and that wouldn't be good for comments, CBAing, reuploading, ect.

reuploaded I think it looks better. 02:36, September 20, 2016

Shading looks nice, but some is leaking outside of the lineart(above the tail and some on the head). Songfire (talk) 15:14, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded I think this looks good.

Define the light on the legs? 15:25, 9/21/2016

The file is named incorrectly -- should be named File:Bluebellkit.kit.png with two 'l' 's in Bluebell.

blur(?) the body shading some more. 22:03, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 49:32, September 21, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more. 03:33, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:27, September 22, 2016

There's some waste around the image mostly on <== that side. 21:40, 9/24/2016

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 00:34, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded Thats about as much as I can smudge it. 33:36, September 27 2016 (UTC)

Lighten it and define the light on the paws. 17:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded21:01:13 30 September 2016 UTC

Smooth out the shading a bit more and define the light on the tail. 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste surrounding the <- paw. Songfire (talk) 21:49, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 18:45:20 5 Oct 2016 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front legs. 00:19 Fri Oct 2016

Define the shading on the tail, and maybe the belly shading should go up a bit along the side of the front leg, if that makes sense? Also, there is waste near the right front paw, I think. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:38, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading behind the front legs 17:31, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:05:25 8 Oct 2016 (UTC)

There's waste around <- half of the cat. 23:38, 10/08/2016

The shading is leaking on the tail, and also, there seems to be a random line of shading spanning over the legs? With your light source, the belly underneath would be shaded, or the line would be erased.

reuploaded It is impossible for there to be anymore waste. 18:3:18 9 Oct 2016 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) - For Approval
god bless — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:37, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, and have the light be more rounded on the belly, the shape looks a bit off, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:25, September 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, I probably don't know about critizing my own work, but is the little "mask" alright? — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 01:44, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

The mask seems a little sharp up at the top, so maybe smooth it just up there in the left side :)

Re-Upps, had to do two uploads forgot to remove the waste the first time — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:08, September 20, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the stomach shading; it cuts off abruptly.

Re-Upps, I redid the stomach shading so hopefully it looks better. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:08, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light source; half the shading suggests the light's coming from the front and the other half suggests that it's coming from the back/somewhere behind the haunch 07:11, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

I'm not seeing how it suggests that, the way I did it, it's coming from the front. Could I get some more comments on that possibly? I followed the shading placement, some suggestions from there trying new shading and all. — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:46, September 23, 2016 (UTC)

I personally don't think it looks out of place at all. I also don't see how you think the light source is coming from behind the haunch, Scarlet? 18:45, 9/23/2016

I used this light source on all of my deputies, which were approved. That's what I based the shading placement example for this blank on. The only reason this looks different is that I smudge my shading to look textured. Although, the shading could be defined on the legs and face some so that it is more obvious that the light is coming from the front. Very nice (: 23:04 Fri Sep 23

The tail shading looks slightly blotchy, and also the shading seems to cut off a bit oddly here in a line

Re-Upps, thanks! — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:28, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

There's some leaking shading on the underbelly right by the front leg's elbow, or whatever you call it xD 14:38, 9/27/2016

Re-Upps — Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 16:02, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 17:03, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

The stomach shading is leaking away from the lineart, and the shading on all four legs could be defined. I'd also suggest defining the facial shading as well.

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw 16:14, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the underbelly shading and add a bit more behind the leg where the underbelly meets the chest. <span style="">16:18, 9/28/2016

There's also waste around the under carriage of the image. <span style="">16:20, 9/28/2016

Could you smooth the shading on the outstretched paw?

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   19:26, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's still waste. Smooth out the underbelly shading more, and add more behind the elbow. <span style="">19:32, 9/28/2016

Re-Upps, I've smoothed the stomach as much as I can —  Minkclaw   19:46, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the farthest from us back leg by the joint, and I still think it could use a little more shading behind that elbow by the underbelly area. And possibly define the shading on the legs a little more? <span style="">23:03, 9/28/2016

Can you define the shading on the tail? 14:44, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, the front leg closest to us can't be darkened anymore as I have it at 100% now. —  Minkclaw   16:06, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, you can. Use another layer with more shading and do it that way. Also smooth out the stomach shading a lot; that area is still really blocky.

Re-Upps darkened front leg closest, hopefully that's dark enough. —  Minkclaw   16:11, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

fixed stomach shading as well, seemed too hard edged to me —  Minkclaw   16:14, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Add more shading behind the elbow. <span style="">16:20, 10/05/2016

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   16:37, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Re-added texture...—  Minkclaw   16:39, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. 18:39:15, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste under the image still by the legs. <span style="">19:25, 10/05/2016

Re-Upps, I'd rather not lighten as I was told repeatedly to darken it..I think its fine. —  Minkclaw   19:39, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading? <span style="">19:44, 10/05/2016

can I get a second on that? As its already pretty light —  Minkclaw   14:05, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be shading - I think it just needs to be defined, so we can see a bit more clearly what is light and what is shadow, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:48, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, darkened tail —  Minkclaw   16:06, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on -> half of the image, and smooth out all of it, especially the stomach shading. It's too hard-edged and dark.

Lilystem (Star) - For Evaluation
--Falcon 49 (talk) 15:31, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

You need to add a lot more stripes to your image in order to match the previous images seen here and here. <span style="">16:08, 9/25/2016

Don't forget to say "re-uploaded" in bold text every time you reupload your image! Also, there's some waste around the image, and a few pixels around the image look out of place, as if they weren't colored in? And there's quite a bit of missing/blurred lineart on the legs and tail. <span style="">16:12, 9/25/2016  Re-uploaded.

Reuploaded again

Please sign your name after leaving a message/saying re-uploaded. Also, the earpink is covered a lot in the --> ear.

Don't forget to sign your name either xD The earpink is covered because that's ear fur. Also, define the shading in <== ear. <span style="">16:39, 9/25/2016

Whoops, and there's also waste next to that ear as well. <span style="">16:39, 9/25/2016

Re-uploaded better now? ;) --Falcon 49 (talk) 16:58, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

There are two uncoloured spots on the right ear (Our right, the cat's left). If you want, I can point them out. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 17:20, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed --Falcon 49 (talk) 18:07, September 25, 2016 (UTC) Re-uploaded. I realized the tail was a bit too dark. --Falcon 49 (talk) 18:15, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste below and above the tail, and also by the right ear

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 19:29, September 25, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading?  <span style="">21:44 Sun Sep 25 

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 13:13, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

There's some odd colored pixels in <== ear? Idk if it's just me. <span style="">23:34, 9/26/2016

Maybe you could smudge a little the stripes on the tail --Waterclaw135 (talk) 23:51, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the eye depth? <span style="">00:07 Tue Sep 27 re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 17:32, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Thin out the shading on the tail and expand the shading on his chest. 17:33, September 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --Falcon 49 (talk) 12:49, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

any comments?

I think there is some waste around the right side of the tail. And also around the left paw. --Waterclaw135 (talk) 23:25, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light on < foot?  <span style="">10:27 Thu Oct 6 

I feel like with your light source, the shading should be on the other side of the tail? Also, define the shading on the chest and right front leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:06, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Lakeshine (Star) - For Approval
Meh. Not sure I like the shading but this is the only way I could get it to look decent without the white being too dark. I also forgot to hit submit on my reservation earlier and it was still open, so that is why it is posted so quickly. <span style="">01:58 Wed Sep 28

Hnnng, this is beautiful ;-; Could you define the depth a tad more on the white? Just at the very edges. <span style="">02:44, 9/28/2016

Could you define the shading? — <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 03:35, September 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'll see what I can do with it. I am restricted to mobile for now because of midterms and I have extended periods where my browser is disabled for anything other than online exam periods for one of my courses once I open my page for the prompts so I cannot run into issues regarding internet plagiarism and the other ones all require a massive amount of studying as they are my majors courses. <span style="">02:21 Fri Sep 30

Reuploaded Have I ever mentioned that I hate midterms? Not really able to change the shading much more than this. Otherwise I will be told to brighten the white. <span style="">01:48 Tue Oct 4

Could you smooth the shading out on the legs? <span style="">03:50, 10/04/2016

Reuploaded <span style="">21:17 Tue Oct 4

I feel like the difference between the white patches and the gray patches are hard to see. I could probably send you the file for the queen, if you want. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:08, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

could you possibly soften the grey and white..it looks much more harder than the queen if I make sense. —  Minkclaw   16:27, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Star) ~ For Approval
Hollyspots (talk) 19:51, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is TOO dark. Lighten it.  ~ Silver Cloud ~  20:09, September 30, 2016 (UTC)

What Silver said. Also smudge the earpink a bit. --

Reuploaded Hollyspots (talk) 00:52, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten it just a bit more. Also, is the nose colored?  ~ Silver Cloud ~  20:48, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

Black cats have black/dark gray noses, so it's fine the color it is. Define your lightsource, as this image looks completely black to me. <span style="">20:52, 10/01/2016

What do you mean by define the light source? Should I define the shading? Because I just lightened it. I color-picked the base from the lightest spot on his kit image, so I really don't know what to do. I also used a shading source I've seen on a lot of other images Hollyspots (talk) 20:54, October 1, 2016 (UTC)

You know how in art class when you work on 3D images? You have to make them look real, per se? It's like that, when you define your lightsource, make sure we can see where the light is coming from. Choose one spot where the light could be coming from and try to match the shading where the light wouldn't shine. If you need any more help, I'd be glad to give you a redline for a few different lightsources you could use! <span style="">22:50, 10/01/2016

Imo I think it looks fine. The base on his other images is pretty dark for a black base (But I mean, it's black, so...) which would make the image look blacker than some others. The light source they used is one that's on many other images, and I can see it fine.

I guess I'll keep it as is until I get another opinion, since the ones above (kinda?) cancel out? I used a light source I've seen on a lot of other images, so...

the base is fine, the only thing I can see with the shading is to maybe remove a little off the tailtip, since it seems contradictory to the source to me. 18:43, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

I feel like the shading should come up a little higher on the sides of the chest (along the lines for the front legs, if that make sense.) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 15:11, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reploaded

Storkkit (Star) - For Approval
Sorry this took me a bit to get done. I'm pretty pleased with it, though. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:33, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front half of the cat? <span style="">18:47, 10/03/2016

Reuploaded. Also made the earpink brighter and pinker, you couldn't really make it out before. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:38, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

The <-- ear needs more ligtening, I can only make out the edge. --

Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 14:26, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Finchflight (Star) ~ For Approval
Pretty kitty! <span style="">18:39, 10/03/2016

maybe define the shading on the body a little by the stomach(?) 18:41, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink a tiny bit and define shading by the stomach. Pretty kitty. I agree. --

Re-uploaded I cannot define the shading by the stomach any more. Also, Neon, try not to repeat comments. Skt already said to define shading on the stomach. And the earpink is the exact color as it was on the warrior, so I'd like a second comment on that. <span style="">16:23, 10/05/2016

Define the shading more along the right side of the upper part of the chest? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:14, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm assuming you meant our right, so here. Also, fixed a few issues. <span style="">14:51, 10/08/2016

Smokepaw (VS)(App) ~ For Approval


This needs to be short-furred. 20:04, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reyploaded Oops.

Commments before approval? 19:26, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Again, hate to break CBA, but there's some leaking shading on the legs and by the rump. Also, try to define the light on the legs a little more? <span style="">00:24, 10/06/2016

Reuploaded Thanks. Just a note that I might be afk from this due to a hurricane *looks outside* and most likely without power for who knows how long. Toodles

Is the lightsource coming from the left or from above? There's a weird line of shading along the top of the hip, either bring the shading up so that it meets with the lineart for the back, or erase it depending on your lightsource. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:17, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Hi, sorry if you guys think this is bad... this is my first time making a charart for a character. My shading isn't so great, but I do like the eyes on Poolcloud. Please comment if you like or think I need improvement.

<font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:16, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

Try not to align your images^^ And also this

should technically be '~For Evaluation' since you are a kit in the Project, but eh. Perhaps try to match the placement of the white and gray better on the --> side of the cat and on the tail

Oh oops. <font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:43, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

How do I become an apprentice

<font color="#9CCFF">Breezy1235 20:44, October 3, 2016 (UTC)Breezy1235

Switched the heading for you (although it'll probably be switched back shortly knowing my bad timing). And to become an apprentice, basically, a lead just has to promote you when they feel your image is (according to guidelines) "50%" complete, and it seems that you know what you're doing. Doesn't take long, in most cases.^^

I made some changes- the new one is below.

You need to keep uploading under File:Poolcloud.star.png, not make a new file every time. It's a lot for us to clean up of people don't reupload under the same file. It also needs to be at the top of your section, not at the bottom.

There's waste in the space between the body and the tail. 02:12, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

darken the shading quite a bit please. I cant tell its there —  Minkclaw   16:17, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste in between the front legs. <span style="">00:25, 10/06/2016

It looks like there's a gray patch on her cheek that shouldn't be there - or is that shading? If it's shading, recede it a little bit, I think it stretches out too far on her face. Also, the ear pink looks lighter than on the other images. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:21, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Hareflight (TR) (Star) ~ For Approval
My second charart! Comments, concerns? Jose1106 (talk) 21:03, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job, but the image needs to be named File:Hareflight (TR).star.png with the (TR) part

Fixed. Jose1106 (talk) 21:16, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Renamed. It needs to be File:Hareflight (TR).star.png, not what you have. Spacing is important for our templates to work.

Thanks for that. :) Jose1106 (talk) 10:29, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

I see a small waste at the right side of the right paw. 21:48, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 22:34, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

He looks a bit cross-eyed. Try changing up the eyes a bit. --

Could you define the tail shading please?  <span style="">10:29 Thu Oct 6 

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 18:59, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

could you smooth out the shading some —  Minkclaw   19:40, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 20:10, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Darken/define shading on the cheek? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:23, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Jose1106 (talk) 19:53, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Voleclaw (star) ~ For Approval
On a scale from bad to bad, how bad is it? 22:32, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define tail shading--  23:14, October 3, 2016 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking around the image, and throughout it in general. Try looking at the category for approved StarClan images for an idea as to how the shading should look next to the lineart.

Could you expand the earpink? Songfire (talk) 04:16, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink and make the shading colour look more similar. Are you using a darker gray as a shading tint? I'm not trying to clamp onto your creativity, but black or dark blue works better as a shading colour. Also, I don't know if I should be commenting like I am on the highlights because I don't know much about the highlights but it looks odd. And also everything above. --

Theres nothing wrong with the shading color tbh. But could you blend the highlights and shading a lil more, please?  <span style="">18:46 Wed Oct 5 

I just noticed a bit of waste by the eye. --

Expand the earpink so it touches the lineart, and the shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart in a lot of places, try and get it back against the lineart? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:25, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't have access my computer with the charart for a while >.< 21:10, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Rowanberry (Star) ~ For Approval
<span style="">22:43 Mon Oct 2016

Sharpen the cream. The warrior is the first in this set, and that isn't smudged, only blurred slightly.

Reuploaded <span style="">21:46 Tue Oct 2016

Define the shading. 19:25, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading is defined enough, although it could use a bit of smoothing out on the face, imo. There's this... round area that I would think would be her cheek, but it's really hard-edged.

Reuploaded <span style="">04:39 Thu Oct 2016

The right earpink is hard to see, lighten the shading there a little? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:27, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">00:01 Sun Oct 2016

Rabbitkit (Star) ~ For Approval
-- — Water  claw  03:51, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

brighten the white, and maybe darken the shading a little bit. 18:39, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload darkened the shading, brighten the white on the chest. 19:11, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload removed waste 19:26, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps define the eye depth slightly?

Reupload Defined the eye depth (is this enough?)  20:10, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

Looks a bit flat. Add a touch of depth. --

Did you ment the eyes or the shading? 16: 26, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Oops! Shading. --

Reupload Darkened shading. 01:46, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little just on the back/belly area. Also, I can't tell where your light source is. If the back/belly is shaded along the bottom, I think the front legs and tail should be too, not along the top like they are. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:31, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Tired to deal with light source issue. 17:48, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Newtspeck (Star) ~ For Approval
Tiger 20:04, October 4, 2016 (UTC)

could you lighten what looks like shading on the bridge of the nose some? —  Minkclaw   15:57, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 12:06, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Wildfur (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
i spent like twelve hours on that lineart and its still bad wtf. Back legs were meant to be posed something like this so if anyone who's any good at perspective can like. redline. that'd be great.  <span style="">19:04 Wed Oct 5 

I'll provide you a redline sometime later tonight or tomorrow, as I'm busy the rest of the day. <span style="">19:26, 10/05/2016

Goodness my sincerest apologies xD I cannot seem to make it how it is in the picture - I now understand your frustration. My advice would be just to stick to possibly copying Briarlight's lineart, unfortunately. <span style="">14:45, 10/06/2016

I can try if you don't mind. I need a break from this midterm. <span style="">15:21 Thu Oct 6

Here we go. The paws are terrible but that is because I had to keep converting it to a smart object to position it without the quality going to shit. This is close to how it would look without changing it to laying down, since I am not sure the pose can be changed that drastically? (Jayce?) <span style="">16:19 Thu Oct 6

-*bows* Thank you Sun for redlining xD I do believe you might have to stretch out the image a little more for that redline, though. His body is a bit odd. <span style="">16:24, 10/06/2016

Change the pose, if you wish. It's been bugging me for a while and doesn't look right, given the current warrior blank.

New one Feel free to use whichever one you want. Referenced off original image linked above mixed with a pic of one of my own cats. <span style="">18:54 Thu Oct 6

I can have him lay down?? oh my god thank you so much And thanks a ton for the redline, Sun. Excuse me while I fiddle~  <span style="">20:25 Thu Oct 6 

omg this is so much nicer  <span style="">23:12 Thu Oct 6 

Oh my god Shinxy you've must've gone to hell and back to do this; I could never dream of redoing a lineart like this. Anyways add some earpink and define it around the edge; blends a bit into the silver fur. --

reups tbh i probably couldnt have done this without that redline. but yeah it was. hell.  <span style="">00:22 Fri Oct 7  I looked at this for a while, I was shocked it was actually a warrior charart. But it's good :D

Timberfur (Star) ~ For Approval
All colors from deputy image. Comments? 19:55, October 5, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the face and depth overall? This is good! <span style="">14:36, 10/06/2016

Reuploaded. Thanks! 16:08, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Downkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
00:07, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Nice, but I'm pretty sure this has to be short-furred since she was a WindClan cat and (unless specified) we're supposed to make them short-furred

Downkit is described as having fluffy fur. Birdflight has fluffy fur, and she's longhaired. Fuzz is longhaired and has fluffy fur. Daisy has fluffy fur, she's longhaired, so does Echosong, Mousewhisker, Badgerfang, Clover, Cloudtail and Pixie. Anyways expand the earpink. --

Imo, the earpink is fine - it doesn't need to fill in the whole ear. But can you blur the chest shading just a tad? <span style="">04:27 Thu Oct 2016

All WindClan cats are to be short fur, and all RiverClan cats are to have long fur, unless otherwise stated within the series, or from the authors themselves.

Before I do any more work on this, I just want to clarify- is this character to be modeled as a shorthair? I used the longhaired model because of the mention of her fluffy, feathery fur, but would that not change anything? Thanks to all for your input. 06:23, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

No, keep her longhaired. If she is mentioned to have fluffy fur, then keep it fluffy. <span style="">14:35, 10/06/2016

I agree with longhaired, especially because she's named for the fluffy fur. 15:39, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Yep. Keep her fluffy. But as I said, expand the earpink next time you reupload. --

Reuploaded. Fluffy it is! But please avoid repeating comments, and I agree that the earpink is fine, it covers almost all of the ear. 22:42, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading? <span style="">00:15 Fri Oct 2016

Down feathers are soft feathers on a newborn/premature owlet/other birds. They are not long feathers. In fact, they're soft and kinda short, since the birds aren't all that big as babies.

Reuploaded. May as well- defined tail shading. Again, before I do more work on this... not longhaired, or longhaired? 23:04, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

i'd have to disagree purely because she's named for it. we've given longhairs to cats that've been called fluffy but not longfurred (mousewhisker, pixie, hazeltail, etc) but if ppl go with shorthaired from here I won't argue further. 23:08, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Given my extensive research on down feathers (which was more like 10 minutes or so), I've come to the conclusion that down feathers are in fact short and fluffy. So, it would have to become shorthaired. <span style="">23:15, 10/07/2016

Reuploaded. Fluff is gone- well, it's shorter. Fixed leaking some shading pixels too. 22:51, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

I don't know if I'm just struggling to see the earpink against black fur but the earpink seems to be leaking onto the forehead.

I think the fur should be darkened a lot more, and the hightlights seem to be a bit too intense, if those are highlights. <span style="">13:33 Sun Oct 9

Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
Hi, wittle pwetty kitty! I wike you! *insert more of neon's adoring she usually only does to her three birds here* --

There is some waste at the left side of the left ear. 02:04, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is really blocky; please smoothen it out. -- 02:12, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload --

I don't think he should have a pale belly, as that's only acceptable on tabbies or cats that are said to have them. Also, smooth out the shading some more. 16:11, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

dust muzzle had one, oakstar has one, probablyy a few more have them, so.. 18:51, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

"Quailkit is a pale gray tom with a white belly and blue eyes." White belly. Boom. --

Reduce the white. It should only be on his belly, so it should only be somewhat visible from the angle we are looking at. Images (Hawkfrost and Cedarstar particularly) have been tweaked for this before. And brighten the white. <span style="">20:59 Thu Oct 6

Question; how the hell do I brighten something that is pure white? --

You could reduce the shading on it^^ I do agree that it needs to be brightened.

Re-upload I don't know how to light source. I also fixed up a random patch of light at the tail base and made the earpink more natural. --

I would layer a much lighter layer of shading on the white, so the white is visible but not obscured. 15:04, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

The white needs to be reduced more. It isn't supposed to be on his chest at all if it only states belly. If you are still confused I will provide a red line later tonight after I finish all the things I need to do. <span style="">20:23 Fri Oct 7

Pretty kitty :D

Re-upload Can you get me a redline, Sunjaw? However I think ATM the white belly is fine as it is, as Rabbitkit's StarClan image has roughly the same amount and I don't think it's been picked on. But if other judgement says no I 'll rest my case. On another note; "?action=history" near a URL really helps with tracing anons. That unsigned comment is by CookiesAreEpic123, and I know that because of putting that onto the URL. I would add in small text next to the message the timestamp and user, but I'm afraid I'd get called out because it could be taken as altering a message. --

If it's specifically only stated on the belly, then it should only be on the belly. Where you have the white right now is very much so the chest area. I've provided you with a redline as to where it should be receded to, probably farther down a little than that. <span style="">15:03, 10/08/2016

Re-upload He looks a bit weird without his white over his belly. But I guess this'll please the PCA'ers. --

The shading needs to be blurred a lot more. Also, the white needs to be shaded. <span style="">13:31 Sun Oct 9

Brightflower (DF) - For Approval
o god what was I thinking?! 08:47, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Oh, my god, she looks evil!  Wonder if there was any other reason that she went to the forest. Not bashing Su in any way, though. Enough of my babbling:  expand earpink. Nice image. I've just realised a lot of my critiques talk about earpink...oh noes, what if someone finds me out? --

Lighten the shading.

Re-uploaded 03:02, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.

Re-uploaded 08:01, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

Sunfish (Star) ~ For Approval
could you rename this file into File:Sunfish.star.png beacuse I'm silly and forgot to change the name :/ 18:52, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

Moved. Can you define the light on the face and smooth out the shading on her body? 15:55, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry, but I can't smooth the shading more 16:34, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Amberleaf (Star) ~ For Approval
I'll fix the shading by the -> ear in the next upload. Comments? <span style="">03:01 Sat Oct 8

Lighten the shading.

Define the shading depth a little as well, once you lighten the shading. <span style="">15:05, 10/08/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:45 Sat Oct 8

Could you define it a little on the tail as well? <span style="">15:50, 10/08/2016

Where is her torn ear? Also, does the ear pink have stripes? 21:32, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:00 Sun Oct 9

Littlekit (YS) (Star) ~ For Approval
I only like your eyes. 15:19, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Do you want and/or need the file for the kit? I can send it to you later today if you shoot me your email address.

Owlfur (Star) ~ For Approval
bleh. first charart i've done in a while for this site and i'm not all that proud of it. - <span style="">22:40 Sat Oct 8

I feel like the white on his tail should be slightly less, it's not quite half on the warrior. 23:30, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">12:23 Sun Oct 9

Shadepelt (VS) (W) - For Approval
23:11, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a tiny bit.

Re-uploaded. Is this any better? This shading just does not want to smooth out. 14:38, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

Either my computer monitor hates me, or there's some waste near the neck. <span style="">14:48 Sun Oct 9

Re-uploaded. I'm not sure if there was or not, but it should be gone now. I forgot to set my layers so that there wouldn't be any waste. 15:07, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

Marshkit (Star) - For Approval
yo

I always imagined Marshkit as brown. But this looks nice! He looks almost the same as his father. Great job! 07:22, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

Erm, please keep comments constructive; commenting just to say that is against PCA's guidelines.

This looks nice. But can it be snowy-white instead of grayish white? 08:09, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

Why should I remove the texture? I'm more than allowed to have it. You can still tell it's white.

Piketooth (Star) ~ For Approval
00:58, October 9, 2016 (UTC)