Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Thornclaw (Alt A) ~ Redone
Redone for odd stripes and colour and shading, OA was some user called Berryflower123 who couldn't art to save her life. Comments? c; 09:21 Mon May 13

Can you define the stripes? Right now it kinda just looks like texture. 11:51, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

In real life some ginger cats don't have overly defined stripes. I'll change it if someone else agrees however. 06:36 Tue May 14

No I agree they should be defined more. Plus, I'm not sure exactly how it works with things like this, but he is specifically a tabby in his main description. I can't remember if her was called a ginger tabby in any of the countless times he was mentioned as ginger though. Either way, they could use some defining.

I honestly think the stripes are fine. They looks like stripes, even if they are faint, so he is a tabby. 03:46, May 16, 2013 (UTC)

They don't really look like stripes to me, they look more like texture, but eh *shrugs* I won't make a fuss if they're kept like this.

Still working?

I'm not sure whether I'm able to leave the stripes as is or if I have to define them? 06:20 Mon May 20

I personally think you should define the stripes, they do seem more like texture. Other than that, this is an amazing image. Bb un   legs  21:48, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

I believe they're fine. You can /tell/ they're stripes. I think in this case, it should be left up to the artist, since there appears to be conflictinging opinions from multiple other users.

I'm sorry, but I must disagree with you Cloudy, if I was to take a glance at this image, I would swear that that was texture, it was only after I looked for a /minute/ that I realized they were stripes. 01:42, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah I'm having trouble seeing them too. They only need to be defined just a tad though I'd say just so you don't have to squint to see them. 23:59, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Star) ~ Redone
Redone to match better, Oa was me. 04:14 Sun May 19

Lighten the dapples and the stripes tons. 04:15, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:25 Sun May 19

Lighten them quite a bit more. 4:29 Sun May 19 2013 04:29, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:36 Sun May 19

Lighten the stripes more. 12:34, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not usually one to ask this, but could you lighten the shading a bit? It's nearly pitch black in a lot of areas, and the shading being so much darker makes the whole image seem darker than the others, so it doesn't quite look like it matches. I know the shading darkness doesn't have to match throughout images, but I think it'd be good if it was at least similar so it doesn't look so vastly different. This is really good though!

Re-uploaded. Could you possibly send me the warrior file, Paleh? 21:23 Sun May 19

Blur the haunch shading a tad? If not, that's fine with me, because this image is fantastic. Bb un   legs  21:53, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

River (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA be Shimmer, tweaked to touch up that shading and blur the color in the eyes. Comments? Bb un   legs  19:42, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Nice! His left front leg is looking a bit flat, could you add a highlight there to go with the light source, by chance? 21:34, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

I personally think it's fine, but if anyone else agrees with you, I'll change it. Bb un   legs  21:45, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Knight~  01:23, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

I also agree with Knight. It's not that flat, but enough to warrant something being done to it, imho.

Sagewhisker (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA was myself, tweaked to touch up the shading. Comments? 21:15, 05/19/2013

Blur it? 21:16, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

The shading on the tip of the tail just looks a bit out of place with the light source; could you make the highlight on her tail extend up to the tip of the tail? Lovely! 21:37, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks, Knight~ 23:14, 05/21/2013

Hazeltail (W) ~ Tweaked
tweak for tail haha I failed 05:17, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, although this wasn't what the image was nominated for, could you perhaps define the shading on the white, since it appears  a bit flat? Bb un   legs  21:47, May 20, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, I think that was discussed last time this was up, but it got declined. The white's really flat. Could you maybe lengthen the tail just a bit? If not that's fine.

Re-uploaded. I tried, grey and white cats suck. x.x 08:18, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Purdy(E) - Tweaked
OA was skt tweaked for the muzzle. Comments? 01:21, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Diesel(KP) - Tweaked
OA was Paleh, tweaked to brighten the white. I played around with the shading that was there, and added another layer of shading onto the file she sent me. Comments? 02:03, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA was DJ, tweaked for a lighter muzzle. Comments? 02:15, 05/22/2013

I know it was only tweaked for a lighter muzzle, but is it possible to define the shading? It looks really flat to me. 08:19, May 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:56, 05/22/2013