Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 104

Squirrel (cat) (Ki) - Declined
Okay since sombody is working on Moon I rebranded by Charart as Squirrel since they're also gray.Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a bit, since it looks too magenta and not a natural gray color. The shading needs to be defined a bit as well. And remember, don't thumb your images! Just go into source and remove the |thumb from the file name. There is a lot of waste around the character so make sure to remove that, and make sure "For Evaluation" is in the title. Sorry if this is lot to you -- 22:20, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh crud! Ur right I 4got 2 put "For Evaluation"Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oh and  I removed the thumbnailBluedragon64 (talk) 22:28, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

This should also be uploaded as File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png. -- 22:30, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Bte I tired remeoving the wast with the eraser but It won't go away! It's not ven visable when I edit the Charart on Paint.netBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I'll keep tryingBluedragon64 (talk) 22:35, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! My bad The wast is visable on Paint.net it's just hard 4 me 2 c!Bluedragon64 (talk) 22:36, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I wouldn't use Paint, I would use GIMP or FireAlpaca to make images instead since they're way better in quality and can make the image look better (both are free). -- 22:37, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

ReuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC) But I c there's still waste! Dang It! I'll fix that imediately!

Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:26, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:32, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a lot more and expand it. The shading is far too overblurred, probably as a result of Gaussian Blur (which is not recommended as it causes shading to leak), so it could be sharpened some, retrace it with a 4px paintbrush or pencil and smudge it with a 6-10px brush at 40% strength. The lineart is also overblurred, to fix just erase on your shading layers, and the blurriness will be gone. -- 23:34, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Bluedragon64 (talk) 11:43, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Please continue to reupload over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png 23:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to redo the Charart since I merged the layers on Paint.net before I began to edit the Charart on Gimp Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:32, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

What kind of shading should I use to shade my Charart? Bluedragon64 (talk) 13:42, September 7, 2019 (UTC)

Most people use blurred, smudged, or drawn-on shading. A small other note - please change the earpink to something a little less purple/neony.

Reupoladed! Bluedragon64 (talk) 12:44, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Remember, don't thumb your images. Just go into source editor and remove the |left. Another way to avoid this is to upload from Squirrel (cat).kit.png instead of going back and doing the posting process again. Also, you have a extra .png in the file name so remove that.

As for the image, the earpink is still neon, darken it or desaturate it some. It also needs expanding quite a bit. Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The shading needs to be expanded everywhere except the chest, and smoothed out a lot. Also, add a thinner, darker layer of shading so the image has some depth. -- 12:53, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

How do define your light source? Bluedragon64 (talk) 14:19, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

If you need help with a light source I'd recommend checking the apprentice tutorials, since they were recently updated with new sources =) -- 14:21, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

I'm consulting a Gimp apprentence totorial for shading. But I don't know what it means when the tortorial tells me to draw the bits with penicl  "where the image is in shadow". Can u plz explain what that means? Bluedragon64 (talk) 20:58, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

A light source is where the light and shading are supposed to be on an image. Say if the light source was ^, the shading would be on the back, and if down it would be on the flank more. Does this help? -- 21:00, September 8, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yes but I'm preoccupied with school and homeworj which is more important. So I'm currently on a bit of a haitus sorry! Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:40, September 12, 2019 (UTC)

When you get back, smooth, define and darken the shading. There's some waste by the ear. Make the earpink a grayish-pinkish color, and this is optional, but if you want, add eyeshine. 19:12, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Make sure to say reuploaded on the approval page when you make changes to an image! Now recede the shading some, smooth it out a lot, and erase the shading on the top of the head and tail. -- 21:32, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

Also like to add one that you need to say reuploaded down here, not up in the title. -- 23:59, September 15, 2019 (UTC)

As what's been stated multiple times, reupload your image over File:Squirrel (cat).kit.png.

00:00, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

FARTS! I THOUGT I DID, BUT IDK HOW!!!!!Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:29, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Nevermind i just figured out how to reuploadedBluedragon64 (talk) 23:33, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry I didn't do it sooner. I thought I did reupload the orignal file but i was wrong.Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:33, September 16, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to user is banned. 01:08, September 17, 2019 (UTC)

Archiving. 19:43, September 17, 2019 (UTC)