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Cinders (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yep, Cinders is Sol's mother. I went by what I saw in the manga. Sorry I didn't get to add it to the table. I'm not back on it yet. 00:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the patches. Nice work. 00:48, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, darken the earpink, and possibly smudge the patches a bit, as they look a little...conform, not sure if that's the appropriate word. *shrug* She looks neat! 00:50, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll work on all those in the morning. 01:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Did you use pure black? You shouldn't have, as it messes with the lineart. Change it to a darker gray. 04:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, if you look carefully, you can just see the lineart. Trollsky She who Trolls everything 06:45, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well regardless of whether it's pure black or not, it still needs to be lightened. Also, smudge the patches a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:48, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 10:41, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did everything said. Changes are showing. 14:21, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit. 14:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

ig i can still comment here, the back left leg seems a lot darker than it should beBlue dawn  With Clouds like Shining  eyes... 15:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's supposed to be Bluedawn. 21:10, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the ear-pink too. 22:22, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to blur and smudge the patches a lot but other than that darken the ear pink and make it triangular. 22:26, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the "black" or whatever it is a little bit. I'm having trouble telling it apart from the lineart. 22:29, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define/largen the ear-pink. And make it less, hot pink-ish. 01:46 Thu Nov 24

Reuploaded Changes are showing now. 12:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the fur more or blur the black spot more. Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  00:30, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing yet  00:43, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok now they are showing. 00:46, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, try to smudge where the black meets the white on the neck. I think you overblurred. Silver, if you have trouble trying to fix it, just ask. ;) 02:27, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry the new version is horrible. My computer needs fixed AGAIN so I'm on my dads. 13:22, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, it kind of doesn't look like it has any. 23:19, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Also enlarge the earpink. 01:13, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

I'll get to that tomorrow morning. 00:56, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This scares me >_>  18:37, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I really like this. Can you possibly blur the patches more, though? 05:39, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I'd say smudge the patches a tad more so they look like Ivy's image. 08:01 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded Yes it's smudged not blurred. 00:17, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 05:19, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

The white on the muzzle looks pure white. 21:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing yet. 21:05, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay this hasn't changed too much since you started. Make the ear pink bigger and blur it. Lighten it a little bit too. Smudge the black patches by the legs and then blur it. Do the same with the patches. If it doesn't seem too different, just keep repeating the process. 15:30, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded hateithateithateithateit >_____<  22:26, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Try to look at other pictures of cats that are tortoiseshell, like Poppycloud or even Sol. See how the patches are smudged like that? Try to blur it and then smudge it, like on DJ's charart above. (Sorry, I'm very horrible at explaining)  21:13, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I need to make it look like Cinders queen image Misty. 22:12, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Giving a slight bump. 13:36, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like I'm making myself sound impatient ._. Should I smudge it more? 23:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Silver...do not comment like that on your images. When someone finds something, they'll comment. Make the white come up past the muzzle and onto the forehead like the queen image. 20:47, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing. 22:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the spots or blur them more. 23:49, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular to make it fit more into the ear. 05:26, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Could you blur or smudge the parts where the brown and black meet? 16:17, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 23:13, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen the earpink. 22:52 Wed Dec 7

Sorry I haven't made an edit. My new computer doesn't like pixlr and I have to wait until after new years to download GIMP again. I'll try to download Gimp as soon as I can though. 22:41, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did everything said. May I please have some help with the ear pink? It's being a real pain for me ;-;  22:58, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

For the earpink, you can fuzzy select it if you don't use layers and move it around, guassion blur, etc. If you use layers, you can always move, blur, dodge it without having to use any fuzzy select or going into the other sections of the charart. Hope this helps. <span style="">05:05, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Reuploaded Finally, earpink I'm proud of 8D. 13:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks good :3 smudge the patches and darken and blur the shading. <span style="">00:07 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Decided to smudge it to look similar to Cinders queen. Also darkened/blurred the shading. 12:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it even more. <span style="">23:45 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded  00:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Frostfur (Lo) ~ CBA
2nd loner, 2nd charart, interesting! Comments? :3 <span style="">20:33 Sun Nov 27

Make the shading darker and blur it, and possibly lighten up the non shaded areas. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 21:33, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

You have white pixels on the front back paw, behind her ear, on the belly fur, on her front leg closest to us and on the tail. Sorry if I'm wrong. Dx  22:04, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. This is nice! 00:21, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, Misty, I'll try to find them, xD <span style="">00:57 Mon Nov 28

Re-uploaded Thanks Misty I found those! xD Darkened, defined and blurred zee shading. <span style="">01:18 Mon Nov 28

Maybe a little too dark. She looks sorta grey. And maybe bring the earpink forward a bit. ~Breezewhisker~ 01:30, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

I hate edit conflicts *coughcough*Breeze...*coughcough* xP Define the light on the tail, add shading to the back of the haunch, and fill the lineart on her left forepaw. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:32, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Edit conflict? Where? :P I don't know what one is Dx) Re-uploaded

Forgot to sign^^) I fixed the shading, it was horrible. <span style="">02:04 Mon Nov 28

Blur the shading some more, and make the earpink mor pink. 21:10, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- 01:18, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur it like Leopard suggested. 06:57, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">00:15 Wed Nov 30

You made it too dark. Lighten it a bit. If you use layers, try lowering the opacity of the layer with the shading about... hmm... 5-10%. Also, try and make the highlights consistant with each other, as the face is a lot brighter then the rest of the image. 05:29, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I'm not using highlights. And I don't kno whow ot lower the opacity. <span style="">11:58 Thu Dec 1

Re-uploaded Lightened shading. <span style="">00:17 Fri Dec 2

In some places, the shading makes the pelt look gray and it doesn't stretch to the very interior edge of the lineart (as in it stops short a few pixels away from the lineart). So smooth over the shading, blur it, and smudge the shading all the way to the edge of the lineart. 00:28, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by "smooth" over the shading?

Forgot to sign ^^ <span style="">01:30 Fri Dec 2

The shading is blotchy and inconsistent, I think that's what she means. <span style="">05:52, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Re-uploaded <span style="">22:01 Fri Dec 2

Make the shading more consistent in intensity and blur it a lot. <span style="">08:08 Sun Dec 4

Smooth it out as well. It looks darker in some areas then others. 17:13, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:25 Sun Dec 4

Blur/blend the shading more 23:51, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">00:26 Tue Dec 6

Thicken and blur the shading a bunch. <span style="">04:30 Tue Dec 6

Re-uploaded <span style="">23:42 Tue Dec 6

The shading still looks a little bit off. Try this style, make it more consistent, and blur it. <span style="">01:29 Wed Dec 7

I did? <span style="">14:30 Wed Dec 7

Re-uploaded I'm not sure changes are showing... <span style="">22:19 Wed Dec 7

I'm withdrawing this. <span style="">00:57 Thu Dec 8

Never mind. <span style="">01:00 Thu Dec 8

Actually, I am withdrawing this. <span style="">01:30 Thu Dec 8

I just can't make up my mind, but I am for sure deciding to keep this up. <span style="">01:32 Thu Dec 8

Okay the shading placement is fine, but right now it's darker in places that it doesn't make sense for it to be darker in. Thicken the shading more and make sure the shading is consistent: an important trait for a white cat. <span style="">00:10 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded Never making the mistake of reserving a white cat xD Because it's challenging to get the shading colour purrfect. <span style="">00:26 Sat Dec 10

White cats and the loner balnks are hard to shade and this is good. CBA? 00:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting CBA, but I still think the shading needs to be more consistent. <span style="">00:59 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded Hope it's good now! :3 <span style="">13:28 Sat Dec 10

Lighten the whole image as it's starting to look gray and the shading still needs a bit of blurring. 21:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'Re-uploaded <span style="">22:56 Sat Dec 10

Restarting CBA. Great job Sweet ^^  00:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki2)- For Approval


In the allegiances for Bluestar's Prophecy, she was described as a gray she-cat with blue eyes, and, in case you couldn't tell by my username, she's my favorite character, so I snatched her up as soon as I found out she would get one for that. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad. Brighten the ear-pink and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the left ear's earpink. <span style="">00:14 Fri Dec 2

Cute! Define the shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:53, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 02:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the --> (right) side of her. <span style="">23:54, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the shading on the paws. 19:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks as if it's not in the right place on ---> this side. <span style="">21:21 Sat Dec 3

And center this ---> ear pink. And blur <--- this sides earpink a bit. <span style="">22:50 Sat Dec 3

This looks the color of her pale alt, which is still kinda blue-gray, maybe color pick from her gray leader alt? It'd look more gray probably. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 21:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen and center the ear pink. Darken and blur the shading, it looks like you have none. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is gray and define the shading. 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the gray lineart, defined the shading, and got rid of some waste i found; changes not showing. Bluestar11796 17:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found some more waste, and changes are still not showing. Bluestar11796 17:53, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading on the <-- 21:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the right ear pink. 21:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is off, I belive. If not, lighten the shading on <--- that side and blur it so it looks a little bit better. 23:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

As said above and blur the shading too 23:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color different from the pelt color, as it looks the same. <span style="">05:34, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

As said already BLUR THE SHADING TOOOOONS! Also the shading placement is off it should be on the neck and on the legs too. 14:36, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looks blotchy, but I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 16:11, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are white streaks on her face and chest. Make those gray. 16:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a bit, and blur the highlights (if any) and shading to make them blend more together. 22:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC). The whole pelt color looks blotchy and uneven, smooth it out 23:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 00:07, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can. Smooth it out. 01:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's possible to blur it. If you're using pixlr, change to something else. I know pixlr only allows you to blur so much. 03:23, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

I do use pixlr at school, but I can't use gimp right now 'cause I'm at school right now, and I can't download anything on the school computers. Bluestar11796 17:52, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Gaussian blur on pixlr. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:51, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpinks. <span style="">21:49 Thu Dec 8

Are you still working on this? 20:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (KP) ~ CBA
I figured if Honeypaw would get one, why not him? And I really don't like this one for some reason.. >.< 18:33, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot to erase some of the collar lineart near where the head meets the neck. :3 18:35, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading lots. 18:36, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Do you see how I have the neck on Honeypaw? Can you try and match that so the neck doesn't look so thick? 19:12, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

<3 dull the ear pink a tad and give the eye some depth. Also blur the highlights and shading, try to blend them together. 19:16, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, do not repeat what's already said. Moonleaf already asked her to blur the shading. Eye style is artist's choice. 19:18, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading, fixed the neck and I took the earpink off from his warrior image, but I'll dull it if anyone else agrees with Sandy. ^-^ 19:57, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

No, it shouldn't be dulled, if anything, it should be brightened. Define it a bit and make it stand out from the pelt more. Good job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:29, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded K, brightened the earpink. ^-^ Also, forgot to mention that there is no highlights on this one. 22:02, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink the same as his warrior image. <span style="">23:27 Sat Dec 3

I did take the earpink off his warrior image, I just brightened it... 00:49, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart by a pixel or two where you took off the collar. ~Breezewhisker~ 00:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define it a tad? <span style="">01:02 Sun Dec 4

Reuploaded Is that what you meant, Breezewhisker? And I assumed that you meant the earpink, Sweet so I decided to re-do it. 14:44, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you thickened it on the chin. I meant the neck. ~Breezewhisker~ 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like this? 20:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tad on the hindquarters :3 20:59, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried xP  21:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch 23:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stupid haunch shading.. >.<  00:58, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad darker. 16:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I picked it directly off of the warrior charart, so I'm not changing it. 20:46, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you did overblur it though. Sharpen it a tad. 00:18, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but can I withdraw this? I want to reserve another charart. 02:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I'll work on it tomorrow. xD  02:58, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Decided to re-do it since I lost my layers Dx Picked the colors straight off of his warrior charart. 20:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the eyes to add depth, darken the shading a bit, and blur the earpink. Looks lovely. <span style="">00:15 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Better? :3  01:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt. W) ~ CBA
On page 271 of The Forgotten Warrior, Sandstorm is described as orange. Pale ginger and orange seem like two different colors to me. I may be mistaken. Anywho, comments? 17:31, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

She needs stripes. Orange = Ginger. 17:47, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 17:54, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit paler/define it. She was also mistakenly said to have golden eyes, so you could give her those too. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading 19:27, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 23:48, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading 23:58, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shading is fine, I told her to darken it. 02:00, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Saturate this a tad. It looks more browny-ginger than ginger. I like the stripes :3 <span style="">02:46 Tue Dec 6

Make the earpink stand out more from the pelt. <span style="">05:40, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Mind giving me a color example, Wild? If I play with it now, it'll just look more brown xD And thanks :3 01:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Here you go :3 Something closer to that. <span style="">01:48 Wed Dec 7

Reuploaded. I want to get this done fast. .. I'm pretty sure you know the reason why. More room for posting and redoing <3 02:15, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and make it smaller. <span style="">22:28 Thu Dec 8

Reuploaded. 02:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The base pelt is much better, but the stripes are still kinda brown. Saturate them a bit more? Make 'em more reddish. <span style="">00:28 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded. And smudged just for the fun of it ;D 00:42, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink just a bit and this'll b e perfect. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  18:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine, wit this colour coat I doubt youll find a better match. CBA? 19:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Seedkit (Ki) - For Approval
Oi...I must really like kits. :P Comments~? 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Redden the ear-pink and define it in her ginger ear. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:23, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks. 19:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Beautiful Twi! Blur the places where the patches are smudged, they're too sharp. 19:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, I see waste. I'll kill it~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Killed the evil waste~! >:) 19:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! *noms* Define the shading. :3 (probably more evil waste for you to kill) 19:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate the evil waste. :P 22:09, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink the slightest bit. Make the ear pink on ---> that side a little bit smaller to make the other one. 23:14, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine to me. 01:43, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

What to change and what not to change? 02:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to change the earpink, it's fine, however could you define the shading a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - But of course. :3 21:44, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawn to reserve another charart 00:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

If this is withdrawn may I do it? 00:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may. Go reserve it 00:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the confusion, I thought we were doing apprentice images. Is it okay if I still work on it, or no? 00:40, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so back to for approval. I will bw working on this so it might take a day or two because I am going to be doing it on GIMP. Thanx for your patience. 21:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Horrible. Comments? 02:00, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading, define the haunch highlight and the one on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and brighten it. 02:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I just noticed I uploaded on meh B-Day ^^ 02:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Either darken the head shading or lighten the "highlights". <span style="">02:27 Thu Dec 8

This doesn't look very tawny... Maybe take the color from Birchfall's alt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the color from the ear pink chart, I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else has an opinion. 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. Also, Take the colors from Oakheart's alt warrior, if you're looking for tawny. This doesn't look...tawny...if you ask me. If it is, it's pale and should be darkened. 03:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did Okay I darkened it because it is tawny I took it from the ear pink chart. I would have used gausion blur, but I don't really know how to use it :P 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better, actually. Now, define the ear pink. I don't care if it's from the chart or not. I can't see it. 03:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading quite a bit. Also, just cause the color (pelt OR earpink) is from the chart, doesn't always make it right. Sometimes the colors just need to be tweaked to fit certain images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (A) ~ CBA
Hey-hey, looks like I'm the first to submit with the new blanks! Told ya I knew where to put the shading :P I'm thinking of giving the shading a reddish tint, but I wanna hear your thoughts. All colors taken off her kit, though it was kinda difficult. I <3 this and Cherrypaw so much (those on chat should know). Comments for improvement? 02:05, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ahead and tinted it, and I made her tail much shorter since in her description it said she has a short, stumpy tail. I can put it back but honestly, I'd rather not for the sake of accuracy 03:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should put it back, since the description was probably just 'cause she was a kit and all kits have short tails. Just my two cents. <span style="">03:39 Thu Dec 8

Reuploaded  04:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? <span style="">08:01, Thu, Dec, 8, 2011

This is gonna sound weird but her pelt looks yellowish. Can you make her pelt a little oranger/gingerer. (I realize that sounds awkward, and i forgot whether her pelt color is orange or ginger so yeah) 16:50, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

All colors were taken from her kit. So if I changed them I'd have to tweak her kit as well. Just sayin'  18:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

This looks wonderful, Leopard gecko buddy! Just define the ear-pink in the ear closest to use a tad more and I'll CBA this. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed: this is beautiful. Brighten the "highlight" on the shoulder. <span style="">00:32 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded  00:38, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The hightlight on the back should be conected to the tail one. 00:47, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

If so then all the loners do as well  00:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I dont see what loners have to do with anything but its so. 00:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I mean the way the shading is. Same with rogues. They have a light part on their back and a light portion of their tail and they're not connected. 00:57, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay well not connected but yours needs to be higher. Ill CBA it when tyou fix it. 00:59, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, CBA? 01:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Frogleap (A) - For Approval
Yay! I got to do one of his chararts! ^^ And I knew where to put the shading before you Ivy. :P Comments? XD All colors are taken from his warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Orly? Smudge the pelt color into his ear some, it looks more natural this way. Very good ^^ 02:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yusrly. And done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear some. <span style="">03:42 Fri Dec 9

Are the changes showing? Cause I just did..... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes just a tad, and then I'll CBA this! Wonderful, Paleclaw! - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it even more, then :3 (dunno if the changes are showing.) <span style="">00:32 Sat Dec 10

Molepaw (OTS) (A) - For Approval
I don't like the shading, but I didn't know the placement. And I got the earpink and nose from the kit...it looks a little neon, but that's my opinion. Comments? 02:22, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eyes and the shading :) And also, perhaps blur the connection between the cream and pelt color on the tell a tad? 02:23, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to email you the shading placement? I made one for my friend, I'll share =) 02:27, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patches look a tad red... Make them a bit more brown and lighten/make the ear-pink a tad less neon. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be great, Ivy. I'll work on the rest after my shower. 02:30, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the cream a ton. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:48, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^_^ 03:26, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Here are two versions of how you could do the shading ^^ Smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">03:42 Thu Dec 8

The cream looks greenish, unless I need to get mai eyes checked. =3 04:33, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look greenish. Please lighten the nose pink. 16:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it after teh funeral. :3 20:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, it looks greenish to me too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Really...? I don't see it, though it may be my computer... I color picked straight from the kit image... 05:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

If you did that and are having trouble with the color, why not just color pick off his father, Berrynose? :3  16:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang (A) - For Approval


Okay, so, she's in 'Chararts needing images' Under Thunderclan. For a Apprentice...wwhy, i don't know, i think it should've been in Shadowclan but okayyy. Anyway here she is! I didnt know if i shouldv'e torn her ears and give her scars or not, so i didn't and i took ALL chararts from her mc image. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The Warriors App said her apprentice name was Yellowpaw. =P Blur the shading. 03:01, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Could you make the fur spikes more consitant with the other images please? 03:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the snout needs to be shortened. 03:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the part not in shadow on her tail longer and run the length of her tail. Smudge the pelt color into the ear. Give her a light part on the dip in her back as the light would hit her there. 03:07, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and she needs a dark gray/black nose 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. <span style="">03:42 Fri Dec 9

Blur the highlights. (If you used them) -- 13:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ruffles in the fur a bit larger and sharper like her other chararts, also make the muzzle a bit shorter. - Scarletwind    ✧ L i s a n n a<span style="color: #592e81">✧          23:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the ear-pink more please. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

Okay, give me a few, i have to get my S.S. HW done, how do i make her ruffles sharper? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:46, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and smudge the earpink into the ear. Curve the line of the jaw more. <span style="">22:44 Sat Dec 10

Ivypool (Alt.A) ~ For Approval
Ivypaw needed a silver tabby alt, it's it's in the characters needing art, I believe. Anywho, I'm shocked this wasn't snagged. xD. 04:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wrong file, Thistly! 04:16, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad, Thistle! Maybe add one more stripe to the tip of her tail? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:18, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the white belly and smudhe the pelt colour into the right (-->) ear more. I love the stripes, but I'd make this match the kit image more. <span style="">04:43 Thu Dec 8

I'll re-upload in a moment, but I just thought i'd point out that since they're alts from different pages/pictures, I don't think they need to match, since I matched the style on the face, and I also think the body stripes match the face. But, you're the Sr.Warrior, so if that's still what you think, I can change it. . 15:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't have to match the main images since it's an alt, but it's the artist's choice. There's some waste by the tail. This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  16:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Theres not trivia for this. When was she described as a silver tabby? If its the cover of Fading echoes, this doesnt get an alt. Shes still tabby and white on the cover, just s different pattern, and that doesnt permit an alt. 03:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste near the last stripe on her tail. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  04:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Purple, don't repeat things that have already been said. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I didn't see that there. Sorry. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  20:39, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

If it shouldn't have an alt, it shouldn't have been in the chararts needing art. -_- . 23:11, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it's been on that page for like a month and nobody took it off. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ya well its a shame that it was on the page, inever look cause i stand by that the page should exist, but just because it was on the page for a long time doesnt mean it should get an alt >.> 23:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still sure that just because you didn't see it, doesn't mean someone else hadn't and could've taken it down but did not. . 23:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I dont see why it being on the list is such a big deal. The fact is she should get an alt for the cover, regardless of what list she was one. Argueing about a list has nothing to do with it. 01:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The reason it's such a big deal is because we wouldn't have this problem if it wasn't on the list and that's all i'm saying. I'm not in on why it should get an alt, it was on the list, I took it, and that's all there was to it for me. . 04:13, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thislte there is some waste by the tip of her tail. xD Besides that I don't see anything wrong... 14:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Cinder that's been said three or four times now. I get the idea. But I won't be re-uploading this until this whole alt thing is cleared up. . 17:49, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is declined unless theres another cite for when she was called a silver tabby, without white. 19:47, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

It's been added. 19:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then this is fine just get rid of the white. 19:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

It was actually pale gray to represent a realistic tabby, but I removed it whatsoever. . 21:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I GOT VOLECLAW :D I copied all of the shading and colors from his warrior so dont be slapping me 4 that :P 13:45, December 8, 2011 (UTC) (im going to eventually set up my sig on here :P )

Blur the shading a lot and try to make it look like it's coming from one light source. Nice job, though. ^^ 14:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge where the earpink meets the gray, and the two paws farthest from us should be darker to match with the shading. 14:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLAODED, changes aren't showing :| 14:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement more like the one in the tutorial. The shading doesn't make sense right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye and smudge the pelt color into the earpink so he looks floofeh =3 18:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

And add a white pixel to the eye if it's not already there. *can't see it* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

He seems darker than his other images, or is it just my bad eyes? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 00:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading on the tail or darken the shading on the belly and legs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. I can see the layers in which they get stronger. 20:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) ~ For approval
Here she is! The bluring just wasn't working with me on Pixlr. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  20:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes, blur the shading/lighting a lot, and lighten the ear pink. If you're using lighting, you may want to add a bit to the tail as well. 21:05, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  21:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Upload a new file that has the spelling correct and mark the old one for deletion. And the shading still needs to be blurred a lot more. And by adding depth I mean add a few yellow pixels in the bottom of the eye. 21:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't it artists choice for the eyes, Shelly? (sorry, have a memory block) Tone down the earpink. And if you want, you can go here to see the shading placements. ^-^ 21:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know. It was just a suggestion. 21:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Pixlr's blurring hates me. No matter how much I blur I need more. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  01:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste by her face. This still needs blurred tons more. Do you have your blur tool set on 100%? 02:48, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the waste. I might be getting GIMP this Sunday so I'll try then about the blurring (And yes it is on 100%) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F &lt;font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6 i&lt;/font&gt;  <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t  <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you use Gaussian Blur for the shading? It's in the filter part of pixlr. 22:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is still some waste by the face. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  01:20, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

How do I use the guassin blur. It just makes everything all blurry. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:26, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Are you using layers, Firestar? . 18:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also lighten the eyes. They look brown. 20:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I am using layers. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  21:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

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Just lighten the shading to make it look not so two-toned and remove the waste. 22:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (A) ~ For Approval
First apprentice! :D Comments? ~Breezewhisker~ 22:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Can you lighten the shading on her back paw, it looks gray-ish. And define the shadin og the back. <span style="">22:51 Thu Dec 8

Where on the back? XD ~Breezewhisker~  22:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

On the top of the back. (I hope that makes sense!)~
 * Shading *on

Reuploaded. Better? ~Breezewhisker~ 00:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Don't forget to sign! ;) Darken the earpink. -- 00:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

To be honest, I don't find anything wrong with the earpink. Unless it absolutely ruins the image, I don't see why I need to edit it a dozen times. ~Breezewhisker~ 00:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be taken off the warrior and then you never have to change it again. 00:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I will. But I'll still have a bunch of comments telling me I didn't blur it correctly or whatever. Honestly, I don't see why the earpink is such a big deal. ~Breezewhisker~ 01:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the patch on her forehead. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ~Breezewhisker~  04:59, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the patch on the side of her head go over her eye like on the warrior image and darken the shading a tad, then this'll be perfect. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  18:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really light to me  20:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Briarlight (Alt. A)~ CBA
Comments? 00:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! This is amazing! Darken the shading on the lower back. 00:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awww! Love it! Darken the bit of shading on the tail. <span style="">00:53 Fri Dec 9

(Wait Iceheart, I thought you were only aloud 1 image up for approval?) <span style="">00:57 Fri Dec 9

Blanks don't count. 01:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, Iceheart. I think you could bring the haunch down a bit more without it looking unnatural. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:04, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Not your Scarlet i edit conflicted eith you on this >.> But go read the discussion page on why i have two images up for approvasl. 01:06, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermjust saw Lichenfur's loner and I thought... <span style="">01:09 Fri Dec 9

Lighten the shading on the rump and lower back a bit. 03:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I was just told to darken it so no. 03:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Stone on this, it's nearly black on the back. Could you please lighten it a bit? And smooth out the lineart on the back, right by the shoulders. It's looks kinda funny, There's like a big bump where there really shouldn't be. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 23:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I still think you could drop her haunch and legs a bit more. Right now, she kinda looks like she's stalking on her front legs and kicking her hind legs out xP - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Clever me lost all the layers, so the less tweaking i have to do after this the better XD. I love that i got to make the line art and then make it gimpy. 00:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job. CBA? <span style="">01:12 Sat Dec 10

Rainwhisker (alt.A) ~ For approval
Comments? 01:05, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I am guessing it's the shading, but can you smoothen the gray on the image? Why, this is fabulous. 02:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the patches a bit more like his manga image? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail (A) ~ For Approval
I hope this is alright. XD I saw Iceheart has three image on the chart, so I jumped in. Comments? 01:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, we're allowed to do three now...so we can start redoing apprentices too? Great work! smudge the earpink into the ear. 01:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. Define the tail shading. 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.' 02:49, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading a little bit. 13:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful, just move the face highlight a ,little closer to the middle of the face. 00:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. This is awesome! <span style="">00:50 Sat Dec 10

Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
I am very proud of this <3. :3. Comments? Elorisa  01:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

You should be. :) There is waste around the charart, and blur the tail shading. 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Would this get a charart? All we know is that he's a "dark tom", and we can't just copy the grayscale from a comic... 04:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteclaw got one and he was also mentioned as a dark tom. I think he should. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Just...dust and echoes 07:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He does appear to be almost black in the image he is shown in; I'll tweak him a tad, but I think he should get one :3. Elorisa  13:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I concede that. Go nuts. 14:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

I can see waste between the whiskers and possibly under the chin area. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 07:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. 19:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ -- Elorisa   21:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">22:40 Sat Dec 10

Tigerstar (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 01:21, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Take the black muzzle out. It was deemed a mistake and removed from his description. 01:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also, there's a lot of waste around the feet. 01:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:27, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Hmm... he was mentioned as having scars throughout his apprenticeship. Maybe add a few scars, but not as many? And not the scar over his nose, we saw him get that one. 01:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! 01:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Stone! Sharpen the scars a bit more and give him a black muzzle. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shellt told me not to have the black muzzle...Should I still put it on? 03:54, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The black muzzle was mentioned one time early in the series. By our standards, it's a mistake and I removed it from the description and put it in the trivia. 04:02, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Shelly 03:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">00:52 Sat Dec 10

I checked 3 times just now, there is no waste outside of the lineart. 01:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Should he have such vivid scars in being just an apprentice? 03:24, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Stone, there's waste. It's in between the whiskers. 06:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink more. <span style="">00:02 Sun Dec 11

Snowfur (A) - For Approval
Yes I can do this. Anyways, i love Snowfur, so I decided to do her. Well, comments? 01:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty! Define the shading a bit and smudge the gray on the ear closest to us so that the ear-pink goes all the way to the top. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Scarlet! :D 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Two uploads? This is beautiful! Setting 24 hours. <span style="">00:54 Sat Dec 10

Sorry to interrupt CBA, but the gray tipped ears should not be included as the earpink. As in the earpink should all be pink because if you look at her other images, the earpink is "on top" of the gray. 18:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, since I had to put the gray ears under the earpink, the gray just poofed. -- 00:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Specklepaw (A) - CBA
Hmm... not pale brown enough? Anyway, comments? 02:21, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make him a tad more brown. 02:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He's "pale brown". Do you mean saturate him because he looks too grey? 03:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

In my opinion, he looks kinda tawny. I think you should just run the burn tool over his pelt at a low setting, because isn't tawny a lighter light brown or a deviant from that color? 16:38, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He looks a little red to me but that might just be me, brighten the tail highlight. 23:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. He looks fine on my computer. 18:20, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. CBA? 19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) ~ For Approval
Oakheart's is not a re-do, but a normal charart, so this is allowed. I wanted to do him before I left. I don't care who else does mine, as long as I could re-do his image. Comments? 02:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Yay Cloudy I'm happy you got him! Define the light part on his haunch and smudge the pelt into the earpink. *is really happy you got who you wanted :3* 02:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <3 02:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. 03:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch and shoulder a bit more; i can't tell if there's supposed to be a highlight on his haunch. [Yes, i know you don't use highlights, but I'm too lazy to think of something else that doesn't say highlights xP] - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:21, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Meh. Re-uploaded. 03:27, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the unshaded part (or highlight) on the haunch a tad bit bigger? If not, just blur the shading on the haunch. 22:05, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploaded. 22:08, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's beautiful. This should be approved fast, we don't want to get this delayed by Cloud's unstable connection. Soo.. CBA? 22:11, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Augh, sorry for interrupting CBA, but... brighten the "highlight" on the shoulder and darken and enlarge the face shading a bit. I'll CBA it after you reupload. <span style="">22:38 Sat Dec 10

Swiftpaw (A) ~ For Approval
I'm so proud of this! I had to fit this in fast, the more the merrier, eh? I love Swiftpaw<3 Comments? 02:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Should it not match his kit? 02:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, his kit isn't listed for a redo. Not trying to be mean, but I think we should stick with how his kit looks. Kay? :3 02:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless, his kit image should be tweaked, since it's gray and white, not black and white. xD 02:48, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blames on me for completely forgetting about the kit image XD I'll change it tomorrow. Ivy: I would never think you'd be being mean, so it's 'aight ;3 02:50, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Personally I think this is fine and should stay as is The kit image is all blotchy and should be redone. 02:51, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll keep it then. Thanks, Shell. 02:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

MAke the nose gray and darken the shading on the chest where it meets the arm. 23:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 00:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the shading less periwinkle-ish and more grey? 02:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 03:28, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the patches just a smidge? They look a bit sharp. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 09:20, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Could you whiten the white a bit if possible? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:26, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:30, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar(A) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Not my best. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think he should be short haired. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make him match the leader image. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur his markings more and define the shading. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 02:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I made him short-haired and I'll do everything else in the morning. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. RE-UPLOADED. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match the leader better. <span style="">00:55 Sat Dec 10

And blur where the belly meets the ginger. 02:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna withdraw this. I'm not quite ready for Firestar yet. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I'll reuploaded this ASAP. 17:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Sandstorm. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  17:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay I re-did the stripes the best I could and I also tweaked a few other things. 17:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the stripes, belly, and earpink, and make the stripes match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded okay I color picked off of his leader image and I did my very best with the stripes. 18:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the belly to the pelt. 18:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded I smudged it a touch too. Changes not showing. 18:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

You probably took the colors from the shaded part of the image, cause the stripes are still too dark. Lighten them. And they don't really match the leader image still.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the non-shaded part of the image. Okay, I looked at the Firestar leader image and I mached it to the best of my ability okay? It matches it the way I see it. 18:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the stripes sharper at the ends. 19:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pale belly come to a point instead of being round at the top  19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry, but it doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">23:06 Sat Dec 10

Honeypaw (A) - For Approval
I sorta like this one... Comments? =D 03:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch just a tad. This is wonderful~ 03:01, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. :3 04:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Move the "highlight" more along the back. This is lovelyyyy <3 <span style="">00:56 Sat Dec 10

Thanks, but, I disagree. The light is coming from in front of her, so her head would be blocking any light coming to her back, really. If anyone else still disagrees, however, I'm willing to change it. 01:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well if you won't add the "highlight" on the back, enlarge the one on the haunch. :3 <span style="">22:36 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded. Better? :3 22:57, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ For Approval
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

Willowpelt (A) ~ For Approval
I quite like Willowpelt :) 15:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but thicken the shading until it matches the warrior image. 15:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 15:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing 15:36, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge the ear pink. 23:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Dovewing (A) ~ For Approval
Not sure i like this... 15:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make her lighter. Take the colors right from her warrior image. 15:26, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I did take the colors straight from her but gaussian blur broke her :( So I simply had to dodge it. REUPLOADED, changes aren't showing, I think :P 15:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink please. Also correct me if I'm worng but the shading looks like it's in the wrong places, kind of like just a big streak going across her body. Look at the shading placement in the apprentice tutorials if you need help. <span style="">22:43, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Yes it is wrong. There needs to be shading onher back hanch and across her spine should be shading not highlights. Just making things specific :3 <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest taking a look here for where the shading goes. <span style="">23:35 Fri Dec 9

The eyes don't look pale golden to me...did you take that from her warrior? Make sure you add depth to her eyes as well  20:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes as well. 20:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (A) - CBA
Wahooo, I dont have to worry about the 35 limit anymore! Anywho, I know this doesnt look like how it did before, but I felt this style fit his description more, but I dont mind changing it to match the old app. image. - 15:39, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think this is fine. I've been wanting to see his kit charart redone since the ginger is just specks, it doesn't look natural. Lighten up the shading on the white and make it a bit less red. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 15:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Bloo, but I think Leaf-storm should get this charart as she posted it yesterday and it was declined because, at the time, we were not allowed to to old apprentices yet. This was directly before the current decision was made. I tried leaving her charart on this page but someone else archived it. I think it would be nice to extend the invitation to finish this to her. 15:43, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm yes, sorry I reserved him as well, Im sorry Bloo :-( ,16:29,December 9,2011 (UTC)

Aww, do I really have to? From what I remember, I reserved him the moment the blanks were approved, but held back posting this since Ivy told me we were gonna do the characters in the ones needing chararts first. And technically Leafstorm didnt reserve this. Check the table - 22:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you ask Leaf-storm? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless of anything, this should be renamed Gorsepaw (A). ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 00:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

It shoudlnt be renamed. 00:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

T.T I never remember what is what >.<  ~Regifloat222  Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 00:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're right, Regi. Iceheart just thought you meant the file name. I changed the heading. <span style="">01:00 Sat Dec 10

Thanks Im really happy now! :-( ,8:16,December 10,2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the ginger? It almost looks russet right now - 17:24, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, I cant tell what Leafstorm meant by that, so Im just gonna reupload this, Re-uploaded - 17:40, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Whatever Bloo this image is yours. CBA? 19:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ For Approval
Okay, so before you begin your horrific screams, just want to say one thing... I know the earpink is kind of hot pinkish, but I got it off the elder image, but if people agree that it should be changed, then it shall be changed. ^-^ 20:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that bad, Misty. Make the stripes match the elder image and make the color more like the elder...that one has more of an orange tint to it. 21:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the colors off of her elder picture, and I got rid of the highlights. (bleh) I'll work on the stripes a bit, but do you know how to blur them like they are shown on the elders image?? 21:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I don't. If you're stuck, go as Bloo, the artist of Rosetail's wonderful elder image. xD 21:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her tail and make her body stripes bit small and add some more of them. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes, and Scarletwind, Rosetail doesn't have stripes on her tail on her other images. 02:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Kind of redoing to look more like her other pictures, so I will probably uploaded the picture tomorrow when I'm done. 02:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, I'll upload it now. :P I know she only has a few strips on her, but I counted the ones on the elder image and tried to match them exactly. xD 04:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes paler and blur them a little more. 18:22, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know it looks as if I didn't make them paler, but I did. :P 19:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

They need to be more pale then, and more orange. 20:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took them off her elder image, though. (I took it off the unshaded part) But if anyone else wants them to be changed, I'll do it. >.< (sorry mentor 3:) 20:30, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the pelt into the ear-pink, the ear-pink looks as if it;s blurred into the pelt. <span style="">00:08 Sun Dec 11

Tawnypelt (A) - For Approval
Ta-da! I'm extremely proud of this. Comments? 21:10, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink to give it a more realistic look. This is really good, Blossom! 21:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Can you make the black spot on the haunch just a tad bit bigger to match the warrior image? 21:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! Could you make the earpink a little less purple? If you got it from the warrior image, then nevermind. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. (Lovely Blossom!) <span style="">00:43 Sat Dec 10

Her nose should be dark grey. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 09:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, everyone. :3 -- 13:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading even more please  00:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt A.) ~ For Approval
Brackenfur was described as a ginger tom in Fire and Ice when he was an apprentice. Took the ear color for his warrior image. Comments? 21:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Realized I used the female lineart xD Removed the eyelash thing, but the changes aren't showing. 21:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little (as in color-wise) and blur the edges of them some more 21:40, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:54, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The back leg looks highlighted instead of shaded. I don't know if it was intentially but I'm just pointing it out. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for what the shading should look like, and saturate the image a bunch. <span style="">01:05 Sat Dec 10

I used the shading placement guide wildheart. The gaussian blur just made it look weird. 02:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the shading a tad and saturated the image. 12:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad more. 20:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ For Approval
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Onestar (A) - CBA
Nothing special, and used my own shading style. Comments? 21:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink more visible on his right ear? (our right) 22:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It was because of the shading, but oh well. 22:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Could you reverse the way the shading is in the eyes? It's kinda illogical, as he'd probably have darker shading at the top of his eyes because of his "eyebrows". Other than that, I see nothing wrong with this beautiful image. <span style="">01:07 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Wait for changes... :) 01:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:29, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBA? 00:27, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Badgerpaw (A) - For Approval
Yay, I actually got him! He's one of my favorite characters. :P I've got two versions of the white currently, both looking like badgers. I don't know which to use, so if you want me to post the other one, just say so. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Post the other one, because I wanna see more of your epic work. The only thing I can think of is to smudge the pelt into the ear pink a bit. *steals* 21:58, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the haunch shading to make it blend more into the highlight? (or unshaded part) 22:00, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Aww... I was kinda hoping to get this, but this is epic! Define the white on the paws and stripe on the haunch. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Edit Conflicts. X.X Anyways, here's the other version. I smudged the earpink, blurred the haunch shading, and whitened the white. It's pure white right now though so I can't lighten it anymore after this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

All I gotta say is I think you should stick with this version. He really does look amazing, Paleh. Job well done. 22:13, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful, just define the shading a bit more and it will be perfect. 23:52, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And maybe smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. This is wonderful. <span style="">01:08 Sat Dec 10

Whitestorm (A) - For Approval
I think I can do this. Alright, I'm really proud of this charart. Please do tell me if something is wrong with it. I adore Whitestorm, so I like that I can do his apprentice charart. <span style="">22:33, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

There seems to be some white pixels in his ears. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC) Also make his ears feathered like his deputy image. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:42, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if the ear's should be like the deputy charart because he is older then and has been in more battles, and it's not like that in the warrior image. The white pixels on the ear is the smudged pelt color into the earpink, unless you want me to change that. <span style="">22:53, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

That would probably work if the earpink had white all around it and you're right if the warrior charart doen't have it then the apprentice charart doesn't need it. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I see what you mean now by the white pixels. <span style="">22:59, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Darn, I was hoping to get this after Badgerpaw was done. XD Anyways we he actually got the scar as an apprentice, but since we don't know at what point, and you can't see the back of the ear anyways, I'd say forget about it. Can you darken the shading. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have tufted ears, too? Bluestar11796 23:20, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't mention what was already said, Bluestar. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  23:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Mmmm xD. Okay, but you can't really see the scar on the warrior image anyway. <span style="">00:03, Sat, Dec, 10, 2011

Define the shading. <span style="">00:11 Sat Dec 10

Don't berate Bluestar for stating what needed to be done, Firestar. It hadn't been mentioned before. She's right: this does need tufted ears. Blur and darken the shading a bit. Lovely job, apprentice ;) <span style="">01:11 Sat Dec 10

I already said it needed feathered ears. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

But then DJ said something about it not needing them, and it wasn't fixed on the next upload. Bluestar has every right to say that. Don't get bossy, apprentice. She was only making a point, and a good one at that. The warrior charart probably wasn't tweaked yet, and that's why it doesn't have the ears. 06:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, just so lightly! <span style="">13:32 Sat Dec 10

Brightheart (A) - CBA
Comments? All colors, patterns, etc. all taken from her alt. apprentice charart which I also made. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:07, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Didn't Ice say we could only remake one apprentice at a time? She said we can only have two chararts on this page if one is a new charart and not a remake of an old apprentice. 23:39, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

She said that one of them had to be an apprentice redo in order to have two on the approval page. She didn't say whether we can have two. I'll ask her. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

She says that we can have two apprentice redos up. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt a bit more into the ear-pink. <span style="">00:40 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks to me that there is a white pixel on the top of the ear to the right >> <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)


 * There's nothing there - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see anything wrong, so CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Feathertail (A) ~ For Approval
I'm so happy I got Feathertail! I tried really hard to make it look like her warrior. Comments? 23:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad for a first charart ^^. Smudge the earpink on her right ear (our right) down a bit. 23:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. And did you get the eye colour off her other images? It looks too dark. <span style="">23:40 Fri Dec 9

Re-uploaded I used the eye colors from the warrior. How is it now? 00:07, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Smudge the pelt (our right) at the bottom of the ear-pink into it more. (If that meakes sense) <span style="">00:44 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded 00:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

On the shoulder there should be a patch with no shading, could you add that? Because it looks like there is shading all over the front shoulder, when there should be a patch without it. <span style="">23:10 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded 00:42, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (A) ~ For Approval
I know it needs work, let the comments begin 23:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's pretty, Wildfire. ^^ Just try to match the pattern from the warrior image a bit more closely. There should be more white patches, and the white patches should be smaller. 23:49, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the patches are too shiny, daken them (or lower the layer's opacity) please. <span style="">00:04 Sat Dec 10

Darken the shading as well. 00:16, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid all the spots, and darkend the shading 04:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

She looks, messed up... -- 04:49, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Crap this is a male template, I stole it from Firestar's apprentice version, back to GIMP. 05:02, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:58, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have a white belly, just a white chest from what I see on the warrior charart. - 17:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

No I looked and it's fine. She has a white belly too. It's just not connected. 20:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the white patches, they're still too shiny. <span style="">23:00 Sat Dec 10

Jayfeather (A) - For Approval
I <3 this and Jay. All colors taken from him MC. Sorry bout taking that spot guys, I'm making more room right now. Comments for improvement? 05:38, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I love the way you did the eyes! Make the shading a tiny tiny bit lighter. 05:57, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks =) 06:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, I adore the stripes :D Blur the stripe just a tad on the front paw away from us. 22:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the end of the tail a bit sharper. It looks kinda stumpy right now, and it's supposed to be "slender". <span style="">23:01 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded  00:43, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather (A) - For Approval
Crowfeather. *squee* I luff him so much, so I had to make him look as good as I possibally could at midnight. All colors stolen from his warrior image, except for the nose color, which came from his kit image. Comments? 05:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! =3 Define the shading. 07:28, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the shading a bit more if possible. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  17:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:59, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the pelt is too blurred into the ear-pink. Make the ear-pink bigger where the pelt is blurred into it. <span style="">00:04 Sun Dec 11

Thistleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I don't like Thistleclaw but I love his design! Comments? 05:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is beatiful. Can you smudge the pelt into the earpink? 06:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you! 06:22, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define ear-pink on --> this ear ,8:18,December 10,2011 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't fill the whole ear on the ear farthest away from us, can you fill it in? ^-^ Wonderful job. 13:09, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the ears. Thanks you guys! :) 17:07, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a little blotchy, please blur it some =) This is wonderful, I can't wait to see this on his page 19:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think I made it too dark but this is as good as I can get the shading. :P 20:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mottles. Looking good! ^^ 22:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">23:02 Sat Dec 10

Re-uploaded 00:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (A) - For Approval
Hmm i taken him because i tweaked his warrior charart, shading are horrible :-( ,20:18,December 10,2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine, Leaf. ^-^ Just blur the chest shading along with the front foot that is farthest away from us, and the back leg. (one that is closest to us) 20:27, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,20:32,December 10,2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the head and make the gray on the front paw lgihter 01:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Pouncetail (Alt. A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">00:10 Sun Dec 11

Wouldn't this be the alt. apprentice? 00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Derp changed the image name but forgot to change the title XD <span style="">00:43 Sun Dec 11

Petaldust (A) - For Approval
comments? 00:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a white chest? :3 00:13, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fail. Yes, she's also longhaired and a female. So I'll reupload this tonight/tomorrow. *headdesk* 00:16, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the brindle patches brighter  00:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (A) - For Approval
Comments? 00:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you juest smudged the shading, blur it some more. 00:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add some gray/black batches to her - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darn I was hoping to get her :3, define the shading a tad. <span style="">00:31 Sun Dec 11

Redtail (A)~ For Approval
Comments? 00:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely Ice! Lighten up the shading a touch. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstar (SC) (W) - For Approval
There was a discussion on the page. Anways, I'm not quite found of this one. Erm.. comments? 00:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Erm...he doesn't have stripes, he's not a tabby. Durn was kinda hoping to do this XD 00:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Those aren't stripes... xD 00:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail (MCA) - For Approval
Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)