Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 102

Blossompaw (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
Eh I was unsure about the quotes so I just added them. I'll remove if it is not really worth keeping. 21:28, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Okay, I noticed a couple things... First, in this sentence, "Sharpclaw, the SkyClan deputy sends one the young cat wanting to join SkyClan, Bella, to join this patrol." I switched the words 'one' and 'the' cause it sounded really weird. Second, there was two 'carry' 's in one sentence, and I'm pretty sure that was a typo so I fixed it. :) 21:41, February 5, 2016(UTC)

The first quote in her quotes section isn't really necessary, and I think "the one young cat" could be changed to "one of the young cats". I also suggest re-reading what you wrote and perhaps adding another comma or two, as I'm finding it to be a bit fast-paced. I did fix one or two, but it wouldn't hurt to check and see if any others are necessary.

Updated. Thanks for the help! I've also moved the quote to the main quote since it's just one now. 22:18, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

cOMMENTS BEFORE VOTE? 19:36, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Vote's up! 05:20, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Pasha ~ Silver Nomination
Like the name, dislike the cat. Comments? 22:34, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, so the things that I fixed; the description should be when we find the information, and it should have stayed as I cited it the other day. We shouldn't combine cites unless it's absolutely necessary. As for the name and affiliations, they should be when they are revealed. It does not say in the allegiances that Pasha was a kittypet- we don't find that out until chapter 7. I know it sounds stupid, but it's a huge pet peeve of mine and actually might be the cause of why some cites were deemed invalid. I don't normally do these kinds of things when someone's nominating an article, so I apologize. I just had everything cited as it should have been, and I'm not sure why any of it was removed.

sorry about that. Been a big week for me I think my head is a little everywhere right now. 23:05, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

CBV? 06:47, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Vote's up! 00:28, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Raven Pelt ~ Silver Nomination
Credits to the one who wrote the Path of Stars section. Comments? 02:38 Sat Feb 6

You missed a cite. Also, can you find more quotes from Path of Stars? I'm pretty sure he had a little more to do than cats complaining about how un-campmate like he is. 05:28, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Updated Done. But a bunch of the quotes need page numbers again. 20:59 Sat Feb 6

I added the page numbers for the quotes :) 21:35, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

CBV? 20:42, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Vote's up! 05:11, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Join
Can I join?

 Ash    storm   03:09, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sure welcome to PC! Make sure to read over our guidelines and FAQ! We also have some tutorials that cover a lot of what we do. Links are on the front page. 20:46, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Burr
Burr is a character who came from the Warriors Adventure Game. Seeing as he is non-canon, is there a non-canon character category I can add in and remove the characters catergory? Or should he still be considered a character and have a non-canon character category in at the same time?

There isn't a category for it. I think Burr should stay a character, but I think a special tab that states this character is non-canon due to only appearing in (yada yada). I could be used for future non-canon characters too. 22:39, January 12, 2016 (UTC)

We could just use the non-canon template we have for Adventure Game pages, tbh. It says "This article is about a non-canon aspect of the Warriors world.", not specifying whether it's about a book or game or whatever. 17:34 Thu Jan 14

That's not a bad idea. I agree with this. 04:53, January 25, 2016 (UTC)

Anymore comments? 20:20, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Alright. I'll go add the non-canon tab to the page. 02:11, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Minor Characters (again)
So! Finally, I was able to get the template over to this wiki. If you've forgotten, this is what we had planned for the minor characters page. So, before we make the page, is there any last minute things I should fix up? Or should we just go right ahead and make it? 15:50 Thu Dec 31

Great job Berry! :) I just want discuss who exactly we are putting there. Characters we wouldn't give a page? Like that gray she-cat in the prologue of SkyClan's Destiny? Are we giving a section for all unnamed characters like Dappletail's Kit and The Old She-cat (ROS)? 21:47, December 31, 2015 (UTC)

From my understanding it was always going to just be characters way, way too minor for their own page; I suppose those characters would count, but they have their own pages now, and history sections that are longer than a couple of sentences...so, yes, just characters like that grey she-cat. 01:49 Fri Jan 1

Dappletail's Kit and the old she-cat from The Rise of Scourge are fine as they are, since they've already gotten articles, cites, chararts, ect, whatever have you. It would be counterproductive to get rid of those articles after the amount of work that's gone into the pages. The gray-she cat in the prologue of SkyClan's Destiny is a good example of a character that would go on this page, though.

Anymore concerns on the matter, or shall we get to making the page? I believe Burnt made a list of some minor characters that would fit on this page before she left, so we could use that for reference. 17:36 Thu Jan 14

Let's go straight to making the page. 22:57, January 19, 2016 (UTC)

Can we make the coding simplified for the minor characters page? I know it's done for our charcat and charother template, can we do this before making the page? 23:16, January 19, 2016 (UTC)

What do you mean by simplified...? It's a template...we won't just be coping the coding onto the page and filling everything out. You fill in the variables like any other template. Do you mean like the blank forms on the template pages? I can easily put one of those on the template page if you'd like? 18:51 Fri Jan 22

Like the charcat template, just so it's easier on the minor characters page. I also have an idea to cover categories for each character. I think using redirect pages for every character and putting their categories, (minor character, rogue, etc) there. 22:07, January 22, 2016 (UTC)

I honestly have no idea what you're asking me to do; I'm sorry, coudl you elaborate a little further...? I can't...really do much to change it to "make it easier"... 15:10 Thu Jan 28

Alright I'll try to explain it better. Look at the coding of the charcat template at any character page, you have |image = character.blah.png, |affie = ThunderClan, |pastaffie = Loner, etc and that. When we look at the source template's coding, it's much more confusing but some clever user has made it easier to write on on a character page, via |pastaffie = etc and that. That's what I want to happen with this template too. Do you understand what I mean? 01:24, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

I believe Berry's already done that, Stealth. It's just a matter of migrating the final template if she hasn't done it already. It'll work just like the normal character template, and we'll be able to fill it in using the variables shown in the coding.

here. This is how you use it. I can't make it much simpler than that without removing pieces of coding I'd rather not. Is it easier to see how to use it now that I've added that guide? 06:37 Tue Feb 2

Yes that is exactly what I meant. Alright, so does everyone agree with my category-redirect idea? I think that's the last concern for me (I'm so fussy XD) 20:46, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Oh and Berry, for the template can you change the family just to unknown? That way we can leave it blank if the character has no family instead of dropping "unknown" everywhere.

I also think main quotes should be allowed (where appropriate), just one main quote is allowed for each character as long as a good one can be found. Like the gray she-cat in SkyClan's Destiny prologue has a couple of good quotes. 21:44, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Alright since there is no more comments, I've made the page. I've had great trouble with repeating names so I've had to go rename some, even go down to chapters and pages in the name. Tomorrow I'll go through and create redirect pages for each character so they all have their own appropriate categories for them. 05:34, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Hazel Burrow ~ Silver Nomination
Aww, isn't he cute? ^^ Comments? 19:40 Sat Feb 13

CBV? 02:11, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Vote's up! 05:20, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Flower Stream ~ Silver Nomination
Not much really. Comments? 07:27, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

CBV? 21:01, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Vote's up! 07:34, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

Patch (RF) ~ Silver Nomination
Credit to the one who started the history, I just fixed that up and fixed the quotes. Comments? 08:33, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

CBV? 21:01, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Vote's up! 07:34, February 21, 2016 (UTC)

Rileypaw ~ Silver Nomination
That took a while, but I actually feel pretty pleased with myself for writing the whole thing. Anyways, comments? 03:21 Tue Feb 16

There's too many quotes. Can you remove some? 07:06, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

The second sentence on the first paragraph, I think, should be split in two. 12:27, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Updated Did both. 23:15 Tue Feb 16

Comments before vote? 21:03, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Vote's up! 07:34, February 21, 2016 (UTC)