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Thornclaw (Alt. A) - For Approval
He has one for the kit, and the cite is real this time. I double-checked with some people in chat. Described as ginger. Comments? 19:04, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. 19:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color more ginger-y. He looks brown, and define the shading and highlights. 19:09, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And fix the earpink on both ears. The pink is covering little bits of lineart. 19:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink's match and redder 21:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I should know it's real, I added it. XD anyway, there's lighter ginger on his face, so maybe make the body that colour? Skt Spoilers... 22:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. You have barely any shading, there's no light source, there's miscoloured lineart, and I can hardly see the stripes. You have one week. 02:35, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

And just a warning, it's currently being discusses whether Brackenfur and Thornclaw's main description should be ginger, so this may end up being declined.... we'll have to wait and see for other's opinions on the discussion, but technically since they were first mentioned as ginger, it's quite likely they'll be changed. 05:56, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, why would it be declined? If it was changed, couldn't this just become the normal apprentice? Skt Spoilers... 06:02, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Not for sure. More likely that the normal apprentice would be tweaked, as it's an extremely simple tweak. Eh, I don't know, we'll decide when and if it happens. 11:12, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Euploadedray(Re-uploaded) Good? 12:06, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the fur more orange to match the kit better? 19:59, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and make the stripes match the kit. ^^ Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 22:42, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear, and then smudge it and make the color match the kit. Also define the shading. 05:14, 29, 06, 2012

Define the ear-pink  16:02, June 29,2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the ear. 16:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add eye depth. 16:46, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the kit? 14:32, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, Sky already said that. 14:44, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I thought Boss said Re-Uploaded after it. e.e 14:46, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Yes, I was caught in the east coast storm so I was left without cable for the past two days. And Re-uploaded.-- 18:01, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think that this about 80% done. Does anyone else agree? 18:31, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't count but, yes. Fill the earpink in more. 17:00, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

This looks pretty 80% to me; heading changed. Blur the shading tons, and make the colour and stripes match the kit. 17:03, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes match the other apprentice image? 00:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? ☯ ~ S t o n e c l a <font color="#6E6E6E" face="Comic Sans MS">w <font color="#523014" face="Comic Sans MS">~ <font color="#000000" face="Comic Sans MS">☯ 06:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but my dad put stupid restraints on the computer so I can only access it between 8 A.M.-8 P.M. for 1 hour. x.x-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:58, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on his ear. 13:02, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink more pink like the kit, and fill the earpink in the whole ear and then smudge/blur it. 15:01, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:33, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- 17:34, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes so it matches the kit? 17:36, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up into the ear. 21:14, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more and smoothen out the highlight on the haunch. 23:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I just realized I forgot to define the shading, so I'll do that now. x.x-- 13:34, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and thicken the stripes a tad. 20:15, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:48 Mon Jul 9

Blur the stripes just a bit?-- 02:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit too. 02:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll thicken the stripes when someone tells me how.-- 12:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Excuse me? You do know it's a privilege to be able to do this image. It's not your own personal right. You being rude and demanding for someone to tell you how to do something is only going to get this declined. You could've said, "I'm sorry, I don't know how, can someone help me?" and we'd be willing and glad. But now I'm debating on not helping you and letting you figure it out for yourself. If you don't understand me, just re-read what you've written and think about how extremely rude and degrading it is. 16:31, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And Boss, what you said was uncalled for. Part of making these images is doing them on your own. We're not going to tell you how to do something. e.e

Sorry. It's just been my life has been a bit hectic lately, so I've been in a more grumpy and demanding mood. My apologies to all that I may have offended.-- 13:05, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

-I'm a little scared to comment but...- Define the shading some more, and smudge the earpink. It looks too straight-edged to me. 14:36, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Cranky people. XD To thicken the stripes, just run your brush over them so that the stripes themselves increase in size. If you're matching the kit, you also might want to take your brush and connect some of them. It'll take a bit of time, though. Breeze whisker  17:45, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hope it worked...-- 12:43, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Toward the back area, near the shoulder and on the tail on --> this side, the stripes blend in with the shading...fix that :3 13:33, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes more and smudge the earpink into the ear. -- 19:01, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and make sure that the stripes show through the shading on the back; maybe try shading with a different color? 13:33, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:40, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more please. <span style="">13:00 Sun Jul 15

Re-Uploaded-- 13:17, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading, and darken the stripes. 23:24, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:06, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. -- 07:47, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 20:30, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes on his back, they get lost in the shading. 02:37, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

This may just be my monitor, but I can't see the earpink very well. Could you lighten it some? 20:49, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's just your monitor. I took it straight from the earpink template thingy.-- 21:46, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 21:52, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and enlarge the "highlights" and make the stripes go all the way to the edge of his back and tail. 04:40, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad more to match the alt. kit. 06:10, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Boss, are you still working on this? If you are, the ginger seems a little too...saturated, I believe is the right word. Did you try asking Rowan for the hex code for the base pelt? Also, define the stripes on the belly/midriff area, as they get lost in the shading.

Re-Uploaded I hope I blurred the highlights right...-- 12:32, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more, and possibly change the shading color as it's probably that that makes the color not match. <span style="">07:49, 23, 07, 2012

Define the "highlight" on his shoulder, or at least make it match the other in colour. 15:26, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changes aren't showing I think.-- 21:57, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the shoulder a bit. 16:03, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define it on the tail. 17:23, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 22:22, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight a little. 23:00, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Dullen the highlights and define the shading. 00:29, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail highlight. 17:20, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

This has been up for a month; it's declined. Any user with an open slot may take over. 03:47, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Taking over, re-uploaded First time I've ever taken over a charart 8D 12:47, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the entire ear.-- 12:52, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

It does fill the whole ear, it's just the way it's smudged, but I'll change it if someone else agrees owo 12:55, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and the stripes don't exactly match his alt kit image. 13:03, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

The base color doesn't seem quite right... it could just be the shading. but I suggest making it more reddish and possibly darker. o3o <span style="">06:17, 27, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded 07:57, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yeah...I disliked the shading owo 08:19, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 22:29, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar(Lo) - For Approval
I'm not really sure how an auto-decline works.... sorry if I've done something wrong. Comments? Changes aren't showing, but pretty much all I did was erase the waste. 16:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The eye color looks like cream. 16:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in the white pixels. 16:35, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please try and make it match? The stripes are still off, and the cream is the wrong colour and in a different spot on her face than the leader. 16:38, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well, she's facing a different way than the rogue and queen, and most of the leader is the other side of her. 16:40, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

If your having troubles with the colors just try to take them from one of her other images. Just because she´s facing the other way I still think the stripes should be the same. But that could also be the artists opinion... Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave!h  17:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not change them. 17:10, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, fixed the cream and teh eyes. 17:21, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and get rid of the waste. 18:09, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes need to match. It doesn't matter what direction they're coming from, Storm. =.=;;

Reuploaded. Copied stripes to the best of my abilities... 19:50, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all over the image. 19:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and smudge them just a tad..

Reuploaded, blurred stripes and cleared...some waste. I'll get the rest soon. 20:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and there should be some y-stripes in there. 21:00, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

What art program do you use? I can give you a tip that will get rid of all the waste with just a click of a button in GIMP! 00:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I used Pixlr for this but I have GIMP. Thanks, Ivy! 01:48, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ears, added Y stripes and filled in white pixles, comments? 03:23, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad, and make them a tiny bit more rippley - like the leader. Also, they look tintet green... Could you fix that? Also, redden the earpink, erase the waste, and darken the shading a tad. =3 05:12, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm waiting until my sister's computer's out of the shop (Tuesday, around this time) because her GIMP doesn't close on me everytime. I got everything but the waste, whcih I promise to erase tomorrow. 05:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hm... I think I erased it all. Just seeing what I can do before I'm allowed to use GIMP. 14:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I didn't reply sooner :S On your lineart layer, select the region on the outside of the lineart. Keep your selection, then go on the shading layer. Go to the settings at the top. Edit---> clear. It should clear out all waste. Then go to Select---> none. 16:41, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivy =) 17:03, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

ass more stripes and define the shading. 20:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

BAHAHAHHAHAHHZAHAHAHHAHA Ok I'm done xD...BBAHAHAHAHAH Make some of the stripes on the haunch y stripes too. 21:03 Tue Jul 10

There's a little bit of waste under the front left paw. Breeze whisker  01:00, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Add cream paws. 02:20, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I um... aDDed some more stripes, Elo(xD) and made some Y stripes on the haunch, added cream paws, and I think I got all the waste. 15:14, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste, the white pixels are back, and blur the paws. 15:53, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded killed waste/blurred paws changes not showing e.e 16:14, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes more brown...they look reddish imo. 16:30, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

define the shading a tad. 19:00, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the cream on her chest. 16:46, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded/ 19:00, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste above her back. 02:10, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. If you don't want any waste, set the shading layer to multiply. 02:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink ,10:30, July 14,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:32, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly shading and erase the waste. `

Reuploaded 23:05, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the top of the haunch, add more shading on the hind leg, and define the depth in her eye 23:07, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the stripes. 00:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look still a bit reddish, make them more browner. <span style="">02:50, 15, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 02:27, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Y'know what I haven't done in a long time? It has something to do with this picture being really good <3 CBA? 04:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but the stripes seemed more blurred and then less blurred in some areas. Could you fix that. Also, define the "highlights" on the legs, and define the depth of the shading. 15:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

.....Reuploaded v.v 15:39, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-CBA  15:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but can you make the color of the stripes match her other images more? Right now they look kind of dark reddish/brownish. 20:13, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks! Reuploaded. 20:40, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing CBA? 21:32, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry again, but the color of the stripes still don't match. But other than that, this is pretty.<3 07:52, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:23, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

-sigh- I can give you the colours from her rogue, since these really don't match. The base is #513017, the stripes #39210d, and the cream #cf9f6b. It's also shaded in black and the highlights are white, if yours aren't. 04:44, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded; please don't ask me to change the colors again, I used the EXACT hex codes Loonie showed me and I shaded with black. 01:18, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste and define the earpink. 01:40, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:54, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

And CBA? <span style="">06:21, 22, 07, 2012

I'm sorry, but these stripes still don't quite match. Try looking at the warrior version for an idea of how they should look. Also, define the shading and there's a tad bit of waste around the paws.

Define the shading on the legs. 17:45, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 15:34, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 15:54, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but there's still lighter pixels on her chest, the part of her eye that's supposed to be white is cream, and there's - for some reason - little green pixels all around her body. 17:23, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and I'm pretty sure cats can't have cream noses. 17:45, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded/ 20:54, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and define the earpink. 14:58, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

-sigh- The nose should be the same colour as her other images. Cats don't have black noses unless their fur is black >.> 00:33, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Reuploaded 23:40, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (TB) - For Approval
She gets one... Ask Cloudy. I couldn't get the mud right x.x Comments? 20:40, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the light patch on her leg and the eyes don't look colored in.. This is too cute <3 20:45, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :D 03:50, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit too dark, also slightly define the shading. Preety. 8D <span style="">08:18, 26, 07, 2012

The stripes are fine. I'm sure Loonie still has the file to Brook's ph and warrior, and I'm guessing the colors match exactly.

Re-uploaded. 14:26, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Cute! >3< Define the earpink a tad. 04:34, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. c: 05:44, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry but her mud looks quite a bit redder than it does in her other images. 19:08, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Mud doesn't have to match ._. It's mud. Maybe the mud she rolled in as a to-be was redder than the mud she rolled in as a prey-hunter. 02:05, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

Umm...this goes for the queen too, why are the stripes above the mud? 15:43, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the light brown on her head, to match the queen? 22:40, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's probably because the mud was set to multiply, which shows the stripes. I changed it. 02:59, July 30, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (Ki) - CBA
Meh. Got the colors from her queen image. Comments? 21:27, July 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading and add a light source. 03:50, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:19, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

This might just be my own opinion, but the shading looks a tad too dark. Maybe lighten it a bit. ^^ Dovey Wings of Steel. 19:54, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shading's fine, imo.

I think the neck shading could be blurred a tad. 22:31, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 18:27, July 28, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 20:26, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Troutclaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
He has a cite for this, so.... I tried...comments? 14:25, July 30, 2012 (UTC)