Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Braveheart (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar12, redone with permission by Scarletwind; unrealistic tabby stripes. Comments? 00:13, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, and the stripes look painted on after the shading, could you darken the areas of the stripes in the shading? 01:07, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I did the stripes before the shading, but I defined the shading on them anyway. 01:11, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes to the legs? 02:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I like how you did this one ^^ Darken the shading a couple percent. 08:04 Wed Dec 21

Pretty ^^ Can you dull the earpink a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this, Misty? 19:17, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's been eight days. I'm pretty sure she's not working on this  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  18:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. Anyone who wants this can take over. 18:58, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I will. 21:31, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it fine that I re-did this again? And I'm back! 22:00, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the stripes and define the shading. Wb!

Reuploaded Heh, I had to use Pixlr. 00:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I love his pattern <3 03:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. Move the shading inward more. 05:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Didn't know how else to do it without ruining the image. 21:33, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and earpink, darken the shading, and try to make the stripes look more like stripes (ie not all the same width) and less like pencil-markings :P 01:21 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded Gross. 02:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The tail stripes should match his body's. 00:04, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 17:29, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a little less purple-y. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:19, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look purple-y to me, it might be your monitor? 18:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (KP) - Tweak
I'm pretty sure that this still needs to be lighter, since I withdrew last time...If I'm wrong, then, decline this. I got the earpink from the kit, which is the correct color image... Comments...? 03:06, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot. OA was Nightfall101 03:41, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yep it needs to be paler, not lighter. Just make the image more pale a tad more. 20:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^  ✧Twi✧    Happy New Year~!  04:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

it looks kinda grey O__O Mind making it more orange or sumthin? - 06:47, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

It's just your Computer, BlueOrca. It's fine. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 22:12, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

o.e Fixing a broken span tag. 22:14, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Compare it to her kit image. The other one looks way more saturated - 22:42, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Probably because all I did to the kit image was dodge it once, and it was fine. This one got dodged twice by request. 00:22, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Tweaked
My first tweak :3 OA was Icestorm123 and the shading needed to be blurred. 13:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I had reserved this, but I don't want to take away your glory ;3 I'll be happy to give it to you ;D Blur the shading a bit still. 05:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

facepalm* I'm sorry! Anyways, '''Re-Uploaded. ''' 14:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail tip. 14:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 15:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks like she has a gray tail tip, and not a highlight.. Can you fix that? 15:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. 20:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:23, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes lighter and brighter, and redden the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:27, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to me like it's only on the outside of the image and in. Lighten the back, darken the neck, lighten some of the legs and tail, and shade behind the shoulders. Breeze whisker  15:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. I re-did the tail shading because it was giving me a headache. :P 18:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and lighten all the shading. 01:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, including the eyes, so it matches the queen. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for a better idea of what the shading placement should look like, and blur all the shading. 22:39 Sun Jan 1

Re-Uploaded. I re-did her. 19:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the earpink. 19:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bunch. 01:43 Tue Jan 3

Sorreltail (K) Redone
Dear lord help me.....i despise this image....I hate it with a passion....*shudders* Ick, comment? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:59, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the brown quite matches, and darken the shading. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 05:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Took the colors from her queen image....should I Daddy? *Waits for the no like in the chat* And i'll get right on it, daddy. *noms Daddy.* Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 05:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the dapples. 05:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink, blur the patches, and add shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has shading, i'll do all that in a sec. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 15:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:56, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on her face come up to the point as it does on her other chararts. And the black patch on --> this side extends onto her leg in the other chararts. Also, it looks a bit dark, comparatively. 20:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has either blurred/miscolored line art on both of her front legs. 20:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It suppoesed to be like that, its her dapples.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, there's actually blurred lineart there. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm....I see it. I'll get to it tommorrow, Leaving today. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the white. It's looks too close to white. 15:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading around the entire image. 01:00, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 01:46 Tue Jan 3

Blackstar (Ro) Redone
I got permission for Iceheart to redo him instead of making it a tweak. His pelt colored bothered me; I felt it was too close to white. First redo as a warrior (Not on the list yet, but I've had 4 chararts approved) 12:27, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

AGIN! Its rogue, no rougue! ,13:51,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Leaf, chill, its just a typo, it can be fixed. Lighten the shading a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Chill Leafstorm, and spell correctly if you're going to correct. Shouldn't the black go up farther on his legs to match his leader? Breeze whisker  16:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just reread that. I didn't mean to sound so rude. Sorry Leaf. ^^; Breeze  whisker  16:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. 17:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love Blackstar! The back black paws should be a little more black. 17:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, if they're any darker than you won't be able to see the lineart 17:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant raise to black up or something xD Blur the earpink alittle bit - 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah sorry. I meant to raise it up so it's level with the front. 17:42, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot the back black paws. 20:51, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black and enlarge the earpink. 20:53, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more - 20:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And blur said shafing. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the black in the ears. 22:41 Sun Jan 1

Blur and lighten the shading more - 00:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Crookedstar (D) - Redone
Needed to match the alt leader which is now his main image. OA was Insaneular with a redo by Icestorm123. I did take the crooked mouth off of his old deputy. *squeals* This makes me so happy! The earpink is bugging me big time 00:08, December 31, 2011 (UTC)


 * D I love Crookedstar. There seems to be some waste near/in his mouth. ^-^ 00:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hehe oops 16:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I never allocated for a cream hind foot in the original image but the apprentice was approved, so whatever :/  04:09, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Pinestar (Alt L. 2) ~ Tweaked
I needed to make him more brownish, since I think this alt image is going to replace his old real image. OA = me. Comments? 00:14, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Does the heading need to say For Approval? I thought it was Tweak/Redone. 01:07, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Heh heh. Oops. XD I fixed the heading. 05:25, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

One thing to point out. He doesn't have stripes, does he? Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 06:56, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

His old image had stripes. No one really had a problem with them. Would look kinda boring without them. Then again, Pinestar is sort of a boring cat. XD I think they should stay. 07:16, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Pssh. Whatever then. :3 Make the earpink more visible then. Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 07:19, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:00, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) - Redone
It was on the list for redoing. The stripes needed to be redone. OA was Sandstar12. Comments for improvements? 19:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

it doesnt look brown,..did you take the color from the old pic? .__. - 19:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^ If anything, now, it's the shading. 20:12, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Maybe try thicken the stripes a bit? ,20:21,December 31,2011 (UTC)

OHHHh Now I see it! 8D Define the tail stripes. - 20:27, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 02:21, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changed the style. I thought it looked a little better. =3 Comments? 00:37, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are kinda gingery. Could you desaturate them and either blur them all or smudge them all so they match? Right now only half of them are definitively smudged :P <span style="">00:50 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded 01:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">01:50 Tue Jan 3

Leafstar (Q) - Redone
Paley...I'm so sorry for ruining your perfect design DX OA was me and ever since it got approved, I've felt it still looked bad and I'm surprised it wasn't redone before. Needed cream and to match the leader. 21:59, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the cream meets the brown. Nonsense, it's lovely. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:11, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Are you kidding, this is better than my image! XD Darken the shading a bit and blur the stripes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:59, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I don't think the shade of cream quite matches the leader. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 03:46, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

I sent Ivy the xcf, so it should be fine.... XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:12, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded don't think changes are showing  04:15, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
She needed to be redone to match others she was on the list. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 03:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the unshaded bits brighter, they sorta look shiny on the other images. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 03:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda greenish. Make her a little more orange. 03:33, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:10, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (E) - Redone
OA was Minnowclaw. Stripes were strange, shading was almost non-existent, and ear-pink was too neon. Comments? 00:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lol, two tabby elders in a row xD There's waste all around the image. 04:20, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:55, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ro) - Redone
There was blurred lineart and the whole images just looked odd. OA was Mumble785. 01:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ya, like the line on the mouth. Blur and possibly lighten up the earpink. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 01:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:28, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the shoulder and haunch "highlights". <span style="">00:42 Tue Jan 3

I think the collar should be darker too, since it;'s dark purple. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 00:44, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't worry Wildy, they're highlights :3 01:14, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh good, I'm not offending anyone here, then :P Could you make the shoulder highlight even bigger so it covers the chest as well? <span style="">01:57 Tue Jan 3

Sure why not. Enlarge the highlights and blur them more if you can Nevermind, just blur them if you can (bloo not logged in)

Plumwillow (W) - Redone
Had to be redone because of shading/highlight issues. I did this very quickly since I was bored/grumpy. xD 03:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and OA= Icethroat21. 04:53, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Redstar (L) - Tweaked
Man, I haven't tweaked anything in forever O_o Anyway, he needed white paws and muzzle, OA was Hawktalon with a redo by Cloudy. 23:36, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

muzzle looks almost pure white, add some light shading around it or somthin' (Bloo not logged in)

Mousefur (E) ~ Redone
Trying out a different way of doing the pelt (very nervous). If this is not what dusty brown cats look like then google images is a liar. OA was Sandstar and later redone by Mintstarr. Comments? (Hopes to not have head bitten off :S) 02:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Derp just noticed the waste. *fixing that* 02:18, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

After you fix the waste, darken/define the shading. Not bad. I like this :3 <span style="">02:19 Tue Jan 3

It looks cool and all, but she looks mottled now... 02:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

If she has a graying head, desaturate along the along the lineart of the head or something. Her face shouldn't be the only thing grey. And make the shading go along the muscles (Bloo not logged in)

I think the colour looks cool. I'm sure that brown cats aren't the same colour throughout all of their fur, so slight deviations in coloue should be fine. I don't think you need to change it. <span style="">02:32 Tue Jan 3