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Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Blur the shading more. Also, it's still leaking on the chest. The lineart near the ears looks messed up, did you put the earpink over it? 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups, that CBA is getting farther and farther away ;-;.

Please blur and lighten the shading, it looks like he has Siamese - like markings.

Blur/smudge the earpink more. 20:46, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The face shading should be coming from the other side based on your light source ~Russettail13

Reuploaded. No, the face shading can be on either side, its just that the other side is commonly used. I'm making the shadow appear on that side of the charart.

smooth out the shading

Reuploaded. It looks bootiful ^-^

Define your light source. The tail looks like it's in whole shadow, and the shading on the legs looks blotchy. 03:16, November 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading

Reups.

The shading is leaking on the tail and main body

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151126C/ezimba11283571116800.png Alright, here are all the issues I see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:14, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink into the pelt, it looks like it cuts off very abruptly. 23:07, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

I think you could smooth out the shading on the main body and tail more. also, the shading is leaking on the legs. (Remember to blur the edges of the shading only so that it doesn't end up leaking)

The shading is leaking on the chest and where the tail-tip is over the body as well. Also, blur/smudge the earpink. 14:01, November 30, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Please reupload under File:Rockfall.star.png from now on, thank you. I've renamed it for you, but for future reference, please remember the naming guidelines that we have. They can be found above the reservation table on the main page.

Yep, I'm still working, I was out of town for a long time, so i had no accsess to my computer.

Reups.

The shading looks a little flat imo, and the fur needs to be smudged into the fur a bit. —   Fla      me    I can and I will  22:35, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Oops wrong file.Reuploaded.

The shading could still be smoothed out a bit more. 23:53, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Can you Blur and lighten the shading more, the eyes are very nice. Belllastar (talk) 22:39, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Extending allowed deadline to December the 23rd due to image being more than 50% complete. 09:54, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks very blotchy. Try blurring the shading with a hard-edged blur tool at the rate of 100, rather than using gaussian blur.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  14:00, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups.

Define the shading deapth in the face (everywere actully) and smudge the earpink a lot more. Are gray cats supposed to have dark noses? The shading is also extreamly blotchy on the tail and it is also leaking. 04:39, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

How do you define shading deapth and yes gray cats always have dark noses as seen on here.

The apprentice image has a pink nose. Please color pick from that, as that is the image you have to match. To define the shading depth, add a new layer of thinner, darker shading to make it less flat. I still say the shading needs to be blurred a lot more.

Drizzle (ES) - For Approval
Love the name. Hate the texture though. Not sure it matches that well :/ 12:57, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you did pretty well matching it :) But the texture could stand to be lightened quite a bit, as it isn't that dark. Also the chest patch only goes down a little bit, and it's like a bib. 13:23, December 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur the ear shading a tad? Looks very lovely :-) 02:58 Thu Dec 3 The white is to thick in my opinion, it looks like she has white streaked fur. --Belllastar (talk) 17:26, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just my screen, but I think the gray on the kit image might be a bit darker. 22:08, December 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 11:12, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I can get you the file from Storm if you need it Shinx? 13:43, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'd appreciate that :) 14:24, December 4, 2015 (UTC)

tbh it looks great without it. CBA? 10:02, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Even if it does it still has an outstanding comment. I sent shinx the file and they havent teuploaded yet. And besides if the light source is coming from where i think it is the whole top of the tail would be in light. This includes the base of the tail where theres a lot of shading 13:09, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I was waiting for another comment before I reuploaded, so that's why I didnt upload immediately after getting the file. 15:07, December 8, 2015 (UTC)

Fair enough, Shinx. CBA?

Sorry for breaking your CBA, but I don't really think the texture matches. It seems thicker than on the kit. 22:43 Wed Dec 9

I think it matches just fine. The kit blanks are so small and this is a bigger blank for an adult cat, and tbh the texture won't match 100% 22:46, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

By "thicker" do you mean thicker lines or just more texture...? I'm confused 23:52, December 9, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine, and Winter is correct. The blank is much bigger than the kit... so I'm going to re-CBA this.

Actually, the texture seems to be over smudged and overly thick compared to the kit. It doesn't match. 11:28, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

Didn't we just address that above? Of course it's going to look thicker- it's a larger blank, and you can't show thicker texture on a kit blank. It'll just look like stripes. The style itself matches fine, but you're probably not going to get anything thinner than this?

It said it was oversmudged, and I do stand that thinning it out wouldn't hurt the image. The texture seems to be much more delicate and thin on the kit, so what if the kit blank is smaller? The texture still can be thinned out here. It looks too thick and the style doesn't match- the kit seems to be less smudged, like I said before. 10:14, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I don't suppose I could get an opinion from someone other than Burnt or Jayce on whether or not I should change the texture..? 10:48, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

It is fine. It's a bigger blank and texture is going to look larger 14:03, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

I think the texture is too dark over the white, compared to the kit. 21:03, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (K) - For Approval
05:05, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I fixed the duplicate images for you! Can you blur the shading on the legs and chest a little bit? Super cute! 05:37, December 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are slightly thicker on his ES^^

The ES has texture, I think, so this should as well. 01:15, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading depth? Cutee! 02:46 Fri Dec 11

Reups Thanks <3! Also, ty Ivystripe, i didn't even know this went through cause my computer wasn't registering it, i tried to post it twice so that explains the duplication. x3 04:27, December 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on her neck and body and define it on the tail. 11:20, December 12, 2015 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking on ==> this leg.  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  06:39, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does he look green?

Still working?

Yes, just been on a bit of a hiatus. I'll have it updated by tomorrow 02:49, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (ES) - CBA
I seriously love this pattern.

Her eyes look like they're looking different directions. It might just be me, though. If you think they're fine, feel free to disregard. 01:07 Tue Dec 15

Re-uploaded Better?

Yep. CBA? 20:34 Wed Dec 16

I'm gonna be a butt here, but I think the shading could be smoothed out a bit on the chest, neck, and facial areas. The smudges on the rogue are also slightly more...um, for the lack of a word, I'm gonna say they're more defined. They're also not quite as pixelized and look... blurred, almost. Also, I don't think --> leg should have that much brown, given that there's not one trace of brown on the side of that leg we can see on the rogue... I think it should be reduced, because if there was that much brown, it would be leaking, so to say, on the visible side of the leg on the rogue. The muzzle on the rogue is also fully white, and this one is brown. The brown on the muzzle will need to be removed completely, as it wouldn't have any brown on it, given the direction the rogue is facing.

Re-uploaded

Re-CBA? 21:07, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

Storm Pelt (ES) ~ CBA
oh god I hate this. Anyways. Comments? 09:27, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back legs. This is nice!

Re-uploaded Thanks. 01:25, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blend the scars a tiny bit more with the pelt? It kinda stands out awkwardly 01:34, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:35, December 15, 2015 (UTC) 

What about his tail? Shouldn't it be more... bushy? S i l v e r t <font color="#55cddd">w <font color="#57d2da">i <font color="#58d8d8">g  08:47, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

thats for notable instances only, which his isnt. 08:50, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Only if it's mentioned numerous times like Poppydawn. 09:16, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

defie the shading depth, it looks slightly flat. 17:01, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  23:27, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Pine Needle (ES) ~ CBA
mew 22:41, December 14, 2015 (UTC)

Nice 0: Add a bit of light to the eyes? 01:48, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups pesky shading layer went over the eyes - and thank you! 16:55, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think since he's a black cat he should have a dark nose? not sure 17:00, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I colour-picked from the kit's nose - I'm sure that was grey. Unless that needs to be changed to be black, that is. 17:39, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I guess it matches his other images then. CBA?

Mothflight (Queen) - For Approval
I am horribal at shading, but i'll fix it later Belllastar (talk) 16:19, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

You didnt reserve this. Also proper file naming and spelling are part of the rules. Please follow them. If you do get to keep this image, define shading depth and your light source. And don't align your images. 16:30, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

Umm.. your not a senoir warrior, I tryed to spell it right but I make mistakes. I'm kind of new to the project (I already said the shadings bad i might redo it) (I unalign it) Belllastar (talk) 22:36, December 15, 2015 (UTC)

You forgot a date on the reservation. Again, if you do get to keep it I don't think the eye colour matches. Either that or lighten the shading and/or the green 00:12, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I know I'm not, but you need to follow the rules, Bella. Please use proper spelling and grammar. Just because you're new to the project is not an excuse to misspell words. You can use spellcheck. This file needs to be renamed File:Mothflight.queen.png 00:22, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I renamed the file for you. Please remember to use proper grammar and follow the rules. 01:48, December 16, 2015 (UTC)\

I'm sorry if I was a little rude, I was just really just tired (the eyes are color picked from her warrior image, and I don't use shading.) Belllastar (talk) 03:59, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

If you don't use shading then how are you shading your image? Whatever it is, it should be smoothed out and defined. <span style="">04:08 Wed Dec 16

It doesn't match the rest of the her images though. I think you should colour pick from something which has larger eyes (say, the ES or her StarClan image). 04:29, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

nah, I'm sure Bella is telling the truth. I think it matches enough- the only problem with the image right now is only that the shading is overblurred and undefined. Perhaps try to erase some of the shading where it wouldn't be needed, then run the blur tool over the edges carefully? 13:24, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  13:57, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:14, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

Fox (DTC) (ES) - For Approval
it's been a while since I've posted something here — <font color= black face="Calibri,sans-serif">b  <font color= black face="Calibri,sans-serif">eau  <font color= #002e63 face="Calibri,sans-serif">Finders <font color= #002e63 face="Calibri,sans-serif"> Keepers 03:51 Wed Dec 16

Blur the texture a bit. 04:16, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded — <font color= black face="Calibri,sans-serif">b  <font color= black face="Calibri,sans-serif">eau  <font color= #002e63 face="Calibri,sans-serif">Finders <font color= #002e63 face="Calibri,sans-serif"> Keepers 04:47 Wed Dec 16

If the light source is coming from somewhere by the top left corner shouldn't the whole chest be in shadow, or is that just me? Nice, by the way 04:59, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Fox is a little more.... Red? 06:28, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

On his description, though, it states he is a 'large brown tom.' 08:22, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think the rogue came first so shouldn't his tone match that? 10:19, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

I figured that as well, but then shouldn't the Starclan also be brown? The Starclan looks more reddish to me. 01:27, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the facial shading just a little?  ❄ Blossomstream White Christmas  13:58, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Willow Tail (Star) ~ For Approval
10:07, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Flip the direction of your head shading or your leg shading around- the light source doesn't match. 10:16, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

i'm trying to get it looking like it's coming from above, it won't if I do that. i'm still tinkering. 10:18, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe move the head shading to be more on the chin? <span style="">16:25 Wed Dec 16

reuploaded altered the shading some more and fixed up the stripes 16:45, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

yeah, I'd appreciate some comments. 05:59, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the arms, chest, and the tail. 13:52, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reed Tail (Mc)- For Approval
15:10, December 16, 2015 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Define facial shading? 01:29, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thx ^^ 15:54, December 17, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the neck shading just a little? Then I think this would be ready.

Fircone (ES Alt) - For Approval
I used the colors from Hawky's image... I tried lmao. Mottled brown and white aka "this was fun".

Whoa that's amazing 0; Define face shading a tad, perhaps? 07:21, December 18, 2015 (UTC)

Actually define the hsading in general and smudge the earpink. Also expand the shading on the tail. 14:56, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Frost (ES) - For Approval
I'll probably redo the texture since it looks really bad, I just wanted to get this up while I can. 00:47, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Stagleap (GC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I tried to match it. I really did. <span style="">14:37 Sat Dec 19

Define the shading and make the earpink larger. 14:55, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are thicker on the warrior. 14:59, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Where the light is coming from? Also stripes... they shouldn't be horizontal. They should be perpendicular to his back, directed towards belly. <font color="#9facf4">S <font color="#90b0f0">i <font color="#80b4ec">l <font color="#71b9e9">v <font color="#61bde5">e <font color="#52c1e1">r <font color="#54c7df">t <font color="#55cddd">w <font color="#57d2da">i <font color="#58d8d8">g  15:02, December 19, 2015 (UTC)

Dew (ES)- For Approval


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