Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Mudfur(Alt MC) - Tweaked
Tweaked for tons of shading issues and the OA is me. Comments? 17:23, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and thicken the shading on the neck 18:14, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think that it's fine. owo 22:52, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading could be darkened a little everywhere, actually. 05:49, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:14, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Add some shading behind the legs and on the back side of the shoulder? 20:42, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded There was shading there, but it wasn't showing up too well for some reason. x3  21:41, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Cinders (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA was Ivy. She needed to be grayscaled. Comments? 20:23, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the highlights(or the lighter area on the stomach/back/tail) to blend more. 21:20, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
 * Forgot she had gray on her px But can you maybe try to make it look like a gray spot other than a highlight?

Lightening the gray would probably do the trick for that.

Erase the waste please? c:. 06:20, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) - Tweaked
I hope I didn't make it worse.... Last OA be moi. Redid the shading, resmudged a couple things, and cleaned up the white markings 02:01, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

The shading seems a little flat, and the white's still looking gray. Do you shade everything with one layer, white and all, Scar? If you do, I suggest making sure the white is the top layer (above the shading for the rest of the image), and shade that way instead. That's normally what I do, since the rest time, the white's too dark. .-.

Re-uploaded 21:42, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Erase the small bit of waste around the back, head and paw please? c: . 06:22, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:01, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Hazeltail (W) ~ Tweaked
First tweaked image. Last OA was Kelsey, and I tweaked the tail. Not too proud of this. 17:04, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart, make the thickness of the tail more constant, make the tip a little less square, and try and have all the little bristles point towards the tail tip. 17:52, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Blue, do you want the file for this? I personally think the shading on the white needs to be tweaked a bit because it seems awfully flat and gray( and that's my fault because I rushed it ), and it would be a lot easier if you had the file, since I put the gray above the layer with the white and everything has it's own shading.

Thank you, Kelsey. that would be helpful. 17:55, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just realize I forgot to thicken the lineart. Will fix that soon. 21:11, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

The shading on the gray was fine, I think. It's moreso the shading on the /white/ that needed to be fixed.

Also, please change the eye style back to how I had it. It was perfectly acceptable and did not need to be changed.

Reuploaded. Changed eye back and thickened lineart. Also, what are you talking about with the shading? The only change I made on the shading was get rid of some waste I found. 21:25, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Well, if you compare the old shading on the file before it was tweaked, and the shading now, it's darker. Mind you, I'm only talking about the shading on the gray, not the white. The shading on the gray itself was fine before it was tweaked, while the shading on the /white/ was flat.

Add more shading to the tail and make the fur on it less spiky. It's only supposed to be a bit fluffy, not spiky or anything like Redtail.

Perhaps smooth out the tail lineart a bit.

-stares- Did you add a new layer of shading over it all? If so, remove it and just darken the white shading. You have the file and it'd be easy to just darken. There's no need to put more shading on all together.

Reuploaded. 22:40, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

The nexk white looks really gray, and thin out the tail lineart. Nice job for a first tweak! 8D

Reuploaded. 22:57, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (A) - Tweaked
Ok, I think it's been a long enough wait for me to repost this. Stripes needed to match better. C'mon, let's get this sucker approved this time yeauh! 17:49, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred and seem a bit light.

Reuploaded Ok but they till needed blurred because last time you said they were too hard 21:36, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

It's your choice, but maybe define the shading.

Sunspots (Q) - Tweaked
Last OA be moi. Redid the shading and am a hair's length away from redoing the stripes. 21:59, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes, mainly on the tail, get lost in the shading a bit now. I wouldn't oppose you redoing them, but either way they need to not get lost so much.

I agree with Paleh. There's no objection from me if you want to redo the stripes.

Darken the shading a tad.

Re-uploaded 02:37, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Erase the small bit of waste on this one, too? x3 It's on the back and near the far front paw. . 06:24, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:02, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Willie (Ro) ~ Tweaked
OA be misty, tweaked to be grayscale. Comments? Bb un   legs  22:42, March 22, 2013 (UTC)