Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Piketooth (W) ~ Redone
Okay I know this didn't look like it needed to be redone but the lineart was smudged and I couldn't fix it, so here he is, OA was Maplepool, I suck at tabbies but I tried and I think it turned out ok, if you disagree that this needed to be redone tell me and I'll just use the other one and add the tooth. 19:15, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I love this! You did everything on this? You got skill! Tone down and blur the highlights. 19:23 Sat Dec 17

The changes aren't showing click on it and look at the first one on the list. That's the one I did. 19:51, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't Piketooth have protruding canine teeth? Should that be added? Bluestar11796 20:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

It is added. The changes aren't showing, remember? Look at the image details. 20:55 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded I moved the tooth up I think the changes are showing now. 21:02, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, yes, now they are. Add some stripes to the top of his head and his ear. Good job. 21:03 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded 21:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least you kept my Tabby style. I liked that style, rather fond of it. Looks good, define the hoighlights, i cant see them. Lovely by the way! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

That's because there aren't any highlights, and yeah I liked that style too. 22:46, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. ^^ Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 00:21, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Wild, you need to get permission, no matter whether you think the image needs to be redone or not. Looks at the top, it says your image will be declined if you don't. However, I've asked to redo this one before and gotten a yes (though I never got around to doing it) so this should be fine, but just for future reference, always ask unless it's on the tweak nominations page listed as a redo. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:25, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry Paleclaw, I'll ask next time. 22:24, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, just telling you for future reference. Anyways, make the color a bit less green. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:37, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Green? 00:54, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

It looks tinted green. That tends to happen a lot with browns. Just move it farther from the yellow on the color wheal/bar thing, and closer to the red. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

He doesn't look green,he looks brown. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

He looks brown to me too. ^^ Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 06:56, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Idrk about the brown-green issue, but make the tooth kinda off-white, as a wild cat is unlikely to have a perfectly white tooth :3 10:18 Wed Dec 21

Please read the message I left on Whitewing's charart section, please dont take this, I'm going to work on it ASAP 17:41, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Braveheart (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar12, redone with permission by Scarletwind; unrealistic tabby stripes. Comments? 00:13, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, and the stripes look painted on after the shading, could you darken the areas of the stripes in the shading? 01:07, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I did the stripes before the shading, but I defined the shading on them anyway. 01:11, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes to the legs? 02:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I like how you did this one ^^ Darken the shading a couple percent. 08:04 Wed Dec 21

Pretty ^^ Can you dull the earpink a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this, Misty? 19:17, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's been eight days. I'm pretty sure she's not working on this  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  18:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. Anyone who wants this can take over. 18:58, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I will. 21:31, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it fine that I re-did this again? And I'm back! 22:00, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the stripes and define the shading. Wb!

Reuploaded Heh, I had to use Pixlr. 00:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I love his pattern <3 03:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. Move the shading inward more. 05:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefur (E) ~ Tweaked
My, it's been a while! I think I got all the waste this time :P. OA was Sandy, tweaked by Mint (thanks Scarletwind). 01:48, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the ear-pink bigger and the shading looks almost non-existent. She also needs a graying head. OA was Sandy and tweaked by Mint. 01:50, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't she said to be longfurred in Sunrise? Yes, she was, i just checked....Make her longfurred. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I'll get that done soon. And sorry, forgot the OA. 14:19, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Comments? 14:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She needs a graying head....take a bit of gray and maybe make flecks on her head? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, forgot the graying head. Sorry! I'll get it done pronto! 14:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can you define the shading a bit more? 14:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Defined shading. The graying head is a fail, I know. Comments? 14:51, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the gray just a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:11, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to have to point this out, but when an animal starts to grey, it typically starts at the muzzle, which is still part of the head. I think you should have the grey radiate from there instead of the top of her head. 21:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, and it says she has a skinny tail, so try making it thinner 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you could try to splice the shortfur tail onto the long fur blank? 22:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Why exactly is she long furred in the first place? It doesn't say long furred or fluffy or anything in the description. Just thick furred, and we decided that doesn't mean they have long fur. Why not change it back to short haired> Then her tail will be automatically skinny. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:36, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know when she's mentioned as long furred. I just went by what Maplepool said. 03:24, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If Maplepool can cite it, then it needs to be added to her description and all her images tweaked. 03:26, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sunrise, Page 141. Its on her page, thats where I got it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:28, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It says that she has thick fur on that page. That doesn't nessessarily mean she should be long haired. It's the same with Firestar, he is described with thick fur but he still is short haired. Although, on that page, it says that she is ungroomed, so you could give her maybe some pelt markings like the ones on Lichenfur. 06:24, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Also (and this would warrant all of her images being tweaked) dusky means dark, and she doesn't look dusky in any of her images. Can you darken her base pelt color? 06:50, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, let me get all this straight. You want her to be shorthaired, darkened base color, markings like Lichenfur, and gray on the muzzle? Sorry, just getting really confused. xP 18:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Yup. Though could you actually make the head just kinda a lot paler and less saturates instead of pure gray? And make it cover most of the head, instead of in little specks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing (Ki) - Tweaked
The shading needed to be darkened. Comments? 22:17, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink on our left go up more. Also maybe blur the shading/highlights? 00:13, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Re-uploaded I didn't touch the earpink but you're right. I didn't notice that before. I blurred the shading and I think this is as blurred as I can get it now. 00:58, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Eh guess I worded that wrong I meant that you're right, the earpink did need to be fixed. I fail XD 03:19, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

That's okay xD. 01:19, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Blur the shading a lot, and change its positioning so it looks more realistic. The shading right now is just all the way around her body, with a lighter spot on her belly; it should conform to her body. Try looking at the tutorial for kit shading placement. 03:53, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How does this look? 08:32, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks blotchy. Try bluring it or darkening it the ever so slightly. This is lovely. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  18:48, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you Squishee :D I think this is as blurred as I can get it. 19:16, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Willie (R) ~ Redone
The stripes, muzzle, and shading needed a little work so I just redid it. Comments? 08:18, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot: who the OA is, why it needed to be redone, and if you had permission to redo it. Blur the shading and stripes. 08:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It is on the Redo list, Icy. Define his lighter muzzle, and add triangle stripes over his eyes. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 10:34, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

He was never actually shown with color anywhere, despite his description, so he should be colorless (unless the default tabby color applies to him) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  11:02, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think it does. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 11:16, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

He was on the cover of The Heart of a Warrior. Make his stripe pattern more like his manga picture, blur the ear-pink. 16:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

What is the default tabby color? 08:17, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brown. ^^ Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 09:13, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. 20:38, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define or add a lighter muzzle. It looks like a highlight right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:30, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Violet (KP) - Tweak
I'm pretty sure that this still needs to be lighter, since I withdrew last time...If I'm wrong, then, decline this. I got the earpink from the kit, which is the correct color image... Comments...? 03:06, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot. OA was Nightfall101 03:41, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yep it needs to be paler, not lighter. Just make the image more pale a tad more. 20:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^  ✧Twi✧    Happy New Year~!  04:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Tweaked
My first tweak :3 OA was Icestorm123 and the shading needed to be blurred. 13:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I had reserved this, but I don't want to take away your glory ;3 I'll be happy to give it to you ;D Blur the shading a bit still. 05:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

facepalm* I'm sorry! Anyways, '''Re-Uploaded. ''' 14:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail tip. 14:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 15:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks like she has a gray tail tip, and not a highlight.. Can you fix that? 15:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. 20:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:23, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes lighter and brighter, and redden the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:27, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to me like it's only on the outside of the image and in. Lighten the back, darken the neck, lighten some of the legs and tail, and shade behind the shoulders. Breeze whisker  15:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. I re-did the tail shading because it was giving me a headache. :P 18:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and lighten all the shading. 01:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, including the eyes, so it matches the queen. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Ki) ~ Redone
Definitely not my favorite. *sigh* But I love Hawkfrosts character.. So I gave it a go. >.< 21:22, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, forgot to add something. OA= Minnowclaw, later on tweaked by Icethroat21 and redone by Paleclaw, I believe. 21:25, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Phew, thanks Maple! ^-^ I already had his tail with a mackerel stripe, so I just thickened it. 22:37, December 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * squeals* He's so cute! Make his tail stripes marckel. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:30, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the eyes be ice blue? 23:20, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I took the color off of his new warrior image, do you want me to still change it? 01:54, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, it might just be me. I can barely see the one pixel of color. 03:11, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to change the style? 04:29, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Smudge the white chest and darken the shading. 17:01, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and I tried to make the white chest a little more "furry". 20:01, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and make his chest a little more furry :3 00:20, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing =3 01:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Blah. Nevermind, they're showing now..  01:08, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Shadepelt (E) ~ Tweaked
I really hope I'm doing this right. The shading needed to be correctly placed and I think it meant the shading need to be darkened. OA was Sandstar12. Breeze whisker  03:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, your fine. 8) It looks like you erased the lineart on the chest, and the eyelash too ^^ - 03:18, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the face, and blur all the shading just a tad. This is lovely. ^^ Wait, you're a warrior now! 8D Hooray!! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:52, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred face and darkened face. Indeed I am! 8D Breeze  whisker  05:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

O.e you are the next Iceheart! anyway center and make the ear pink more triangular, it looks like a blob. *bows* this is wonderful, Your Majesty. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  18:51, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. XD Thanks. Breeze whisker  23:51, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar (L) - Redone
I refuse to cause more drama over a redone image, so if you don't think this should be redone, go ahead and decline it, it's not worth the fighting. But the cream looked like highlights and that needed to be fixed. It'd be kind of ridiculous to ask anyone to fix that without redoing though. I'm planning to do all the images. OA was Bramble. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:42, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

She's so cute! Blur the patches. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:35, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Gotta fight for what you believe in. ;) It's lovely, though I've never been fond of the nonsensical pattern of brown with cream blotches. I wouldn't mind seeing it changed to something that makes a bit more sense... However, that's entirely up to you. ^^ 16:21, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

My cat is a light brown with a few little cream spots, so it's somewhat possible xD Define the shading a tad bit on the tail. 17:43, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little bit. As I said in the chat Paleclaw, lovely <3 18:57, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

If Since you're planning to redo the images, could I at least do the queen since I'm the OA? *puppy dog eyes* 22:26, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - If you can find a photo of a brown and cream tabby, I'd be happy to copy the pattern, but I personally couldn't, so I just went with the style that this used to have. XD And I yes you can Ivy, as I said on your talk page. :P Did all the other things told. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:17, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I can do that. ^^ Let's see, this is what you're working with now, which is basically a torbie (for those of you creeping on this post that don't know what that is, it's a tabby/tortie). This is one interpretation of a cream and brown tabby, which is a just a cream tabby with brown stripes (like Tigerstar on the Tigerstar and Sasha covers). Then there's this guy who is a brown tabby with cream underparts (notice that the stripes are always the same color and don't change over the cream). Hope that helps. ^^ 01:30, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

That last one seems like the most accurate. I'd say go with him. 01:37, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorreltail (K) Redone
Dear lord help me.....i despise this image....I hate it with a passion....*shudders* Ick, comment? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:59, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the brown quite matches, and darken the shading. Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 05:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Took the colors from her queen image....should I Daddy? *Waits for the no like in the chat* And i'll get right on it, daddy. *noms Daddy.* Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 05:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the dapples. 05:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink, blur the patches, and add shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has shading, i'll do all that in a sec. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 15:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:56, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on her face come up to the point as it does on her other chararts. And the black patch on --> this side extends onto her leg in the other chararts. Also, it looks a bit dark, comparatively. 20:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has either blurred/miscolored line art on both of her front legs. 20:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It suppoesed to be like that, its her dapples.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, there's actually blurred lineart there. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm....I see it. I'll get to it tommorrow, Leaving today. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Nightcloud (Q) ~ Tweaked
First tweak as a warrior (: Okay, any way, OA was Insaneular, then Leggy took care of the eyes and Ivystripe took care of the nose. Okay, comments for improvement? 05:22, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten it up some, I can hardly see the lineart. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 05:50, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

What needed to be done? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:16, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It was the highlights. It was on the Tweak Week list. 17:19, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. 17:44, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, sorry, forgot to mention why it needed to be tweaked. =P Any way, re-uploaded. Comments? 05:03, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (Ki) ~ Redone
Aww, who's a cute little tyrant? 8D ... Comments? 03:11, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah. OA was Scarletwind, I believe. I think so... that's what the file history says, at least. 03:12, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

He was so adorable before he decided to take over the world! Make the pale chest look more furry~ 03:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Bone (Ro) - Redone
He needed to be redone for lots of reasons that I can't remember because I'm tired. OA was Honeyfur. 03:51, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

You seem to take every charart I intended to do XD This is really good, but he seems over-smudged to the point where he almost appears to have stripes, and could you add more scars to his pelt as we was described with multiple ones? 03:53, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Crap... you noticed >.>  04:20, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

His black spots look almost like they were colored in with pencil. I looks pretty cool actually, but not really very natural. Could you make them more solid? And I think there's some waste in front of the inner hind leg. Breeze whisker  06:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Woo-hoo, redid the markings. They may look unorthodox, but I'm going for something unique. I'm not saying they're unrealistic, however, so don't call me out on that. 18:52, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (W.Alt.) - Tweaked
I wonder why It wast been tweaked before... it needed to be longhaired, I havent changed the pattern or something, it just tweaked. OA is Rainwillow and I owe her work so much. ,09:46,December 30,2011 (UTC)

There's some waste in front of the chest fluff 16:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,17:23,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (R) Redone
I got permission for Iceheart to redo him instead of making it a tweak. His pelt colored bothered me; I felt it was too close to white. First redo as a warrior (Not on the list yet, but I've had 4 chararts approved) 12:27, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

AGIN! Its rogue, no rougue! ,13:51,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Leaf, chill, its just a typo, it can be fixed. Lighten the shading a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Chill Leafstorm, and spell correctly if you're going to correct. Shouldn't the black go up farther on his legs to match his leader? Breeze whisker  16:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just reread that. I didn't mean to sound so rude. Sorry Leaf. ^^; Breeze  whisker  16:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. 17:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love Blackstar! The back black paws should be a little more black. 17:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, if they're any darker than you won't be able to see the lineart 17:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant raise to black up or something xD Blur the earpink alittle bit - 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah sorry. I meant to raise it up so it's level with the front. 17:42, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (W) ~ Redone
Hmmph. Who said it'd take me a long time to do these images? Comments? 20:43, December 30, 2011 (UTC)