Forum:Silver Nomination -The Rescue/Part 1


 * ARTICLE: The Rescue/Part 1
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 * COMMENTS FROM NOMINATOR: Okay so it's hard to write the summary of a graphic novel chapter that is like 40 pages without making it too long (oops did it anyways) but trying to not make it confusing. Anyways, tell me if there is a part that is confusing as in the location, what the character is doing, etc. or if a part doesn't make sense. Or any other comments too, of course.


 * 23:48 Thu Dec 31