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Smokefoot (E) ~For Approval
Shading is hard.

01:26, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to say this, but define it more. I have to zoom in close to see it. I also think there's an unfilled pixel on the tail? 01:43, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add depth to the ear pink? It seems a bit flat.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:35, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

06:06, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could still use defining

Reuploaded

19:44, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 22:09, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

03:03, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

hm the shading could still use some defining. try darkening it and then using a 40 opacity eraser tool to erase the edges? 05:18, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Updated.

02:44, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more shading along the bottom of the face and the ears. There's also leaking shading on the front elbow area. You're doing great! :) 21:54, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Vec, I think I got it? I'm just terrible with shading lmao.

22:51, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

waste behind the head

smoothshading out Willowstep12 (talk) 17:21, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed

18:29, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, given the source, there wouldn't be any shading on the front of the chest; rather, it'd be on the < side. I also believe the haunch shading should be receded and rounded out a bit.

Better?

19:02, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

hmm maybe could you smooth the shading on the haunch to shoulder place? it seems a little hard -- 13:57, 4/07/2019

Looks fine to me? Might be my screen though.

00:03, April 8, 2019 (UTC)

should add some shading to the chest area, close to the front leg if you get what I mean

i agree that it needs to be smoothed out– especially on the shoulder and the haunch. 13:16, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Moss (KP) (KP)- For Evaluation
Comment Away!-- 18:54, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Looking good! Her muzzle looks a bit bright compared to the rest of her set, so darken it up a bit. Expand the shading everywhere, but particularly on the hind legs. 19:14, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks Egg! I colorpicked off the loner, not sure why it looks brighter. Will fix momentarily. 19:45, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't want to expand it anymore on the tail, or I'll be told to define the light. 19:54, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe smoothen out and blur the shading more? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:35, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Of course! I'll do that in a little bit. 22:39, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Shadow, can you be more specific on where it needs to be smoothed out? 22:52, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the back of the haunch and shoulder! -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:58, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it more on the <--- haunch and stomach? The shading is also leaking on the collar. Also, I feel like the shading tint clashes with the color of the image. Maybe make it darker? 23:14, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vec, where is it leaking on the collar? And can I gently ask for a second opinion on the tint? Silverfur used a similar color on Flailfoot's tunneler. 23:37, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded for other commments 23:48, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. I can't see it at all. ​​​

red line. And the tint is darker on Flailfoot's tunneler since it was tweaked. Darkening the tint might also help with darkening the shading overall, forgot to mention earlier ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 02:59, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

i appreciate you mentioning me ^^ could i ask what's the black specks near the rear leg? -- 11:34, 4/01/2019

To explain comments:

Vec: It isn't leaking, it's just light shading. I'll fix it next upload.

Silver: That's a layer goof, fix next upload.

Jayce: I'll saturate the shading a bit, but like 2 clicks or so otherwise it'll look neon. 22:06, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded here's your proof shading isn't leaking. Better? 23:06, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a bit darker? I can't really see it. 23:09, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Potato, I didn't say you had to saturate the shading. I couldn't see it, meaning it should probably have the opacity turned up. The tint itself is perfectly fine as-is, and you're right that multiple people have used that tint before. ​​​​

Reuploaded sorry, got confused with your's and Vec's comment. Anywho, I don't want to darken it much more or the lineart won't be noticeable anymore. Better? 23:31, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the ears, belly, tail, legs and back ^^  -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  23:36, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think with the source I'm using, there shouldn't be shading on the back. Shadow, can you screenshot where? 00:11, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like you've got waste all over the image. 01:46, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think there is any waste on my screen in PS, but this may be a result of blurring the shading and I'll check tomorrow. 02:09, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded you were right, and there was waste. If it is still showing up, I'll wave the eraser in those areas tomorrow. 02:32, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

going to nitpick on the shading as it's really light and makes the image odd. it can be tweaked by making the layer mutiply and making the tint a darker blue. -- 04:46, 4/02/2019

Reuploaded changes aren't showing yet. 21:43, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Changes are now showing. 22:09, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading out more? 05:17, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, paws and legs. 12:37, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ham with Gaussian Blur. Better? 22:36, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the gray muzzle and ear-pink and I really can't tell where the light it coming from 00:19, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'll blur the muzzle, but can I gently ask for a second opinion on the earpink? On a previous declined art, I tried to blur it but it looked like a hot mess. The light is coming from the right, so the shading is on the left. 00:49, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded for paler muzzle if I need to blur more just let me know. 00:53, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

you still need to smooth out the shading. 02:17, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Used the smudge tool this time. 21:57, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Theres waste everywhere outside the image 23:53, 4/04/2019

Reuploaded if it's still there, idk what to tell you because I'm pretty sure I erased it all. 01:07, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

It is still there unless the changes are not showing. Try having a white background so that you can see the waste more clearly.

Reuploaded I think I got it all. 22:04, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading some more ? 14:23, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded also tweaked the paler muzzle. 15:23, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again waste. It should be gone now, cause I noticed more and got my lucky lasso. 15:35, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, there wouldn't be any shading on the > side of the haunch, nor at the top of the shoulder, though it should extend higher up the arm from the bottom^^

Reuploaded  20:25, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

The waste is still there under the front arm. collar shading is leaking <-

define the light on the front leg nearest to us? -- 13:56, 4/07/2019

Reuploaded I'll get rid of the waste later. 15:18, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you perhaps try smudging the muzzle, and using a tiny brush to smooth out the shading on the collar? 13:30, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Rosetail (E) ~ For Approval
back and ready for the elder rush

15:00, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Did you fill in the nose? It's either not filled in or is a very light color. Define/Darken it. 22:11, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

The nose is filled in and doesn’t need defining. ​​​

Stripes seem to fade in color a bit more as they go down the front legs on the other images^^

Reuploaded

22:13, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. So I meant the stripes become almost lighter/less visible as they go down to the paws on the front legs, could you see about perhaps tweaking it a little more?

Longtail (e) ~ For Approval
his stripe pattern is annoyingly spacy but ya' know.

15:34, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Would you object to softening the stripes every so slightly? These are a tiny bit sharper than his other images. It's not a lot, and I apologize if this is insanely picky.

Can you make his eye more cloudy? On the original elder and the soon-to-be redone warrior, it was completely clouded over and the pupil wasn't visible. If I'm wrong, you don't have to do it. ;) 22:27, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

22:17, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could be my laptop, do let me know, but the base on this seems darker than the star. Ik the star and app don't match, but the star would be more correct due to being lighter per his cites

The Star was also the first one tweaked, so it has to match that anyways. ​​​

Tiny black kit (Ki) - For evaluation
I hope it's not weird- my first ever charart!



09:03, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

hello, you need to add shading to the image. what program are you using? check out the tutorials if you need help, or dont hesitate to reach out to anybody here 09:13, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add earpink and nosepink. 13:04, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

darken the the eye puple, what program are you using?Willowstep12 (talk) 13:09, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

I do have GIMP-but it's hard, so yeah. My paint program that's I'm using i don't think it works well without transparent images. Welp I'll use something else. And I did add shading, but it's not that dark I think. I'll add earpink and nosepink.

There! I fixed it (I hope :P)

That's better. However, by the looks of it, you aren't using layers, which means colors can leak past the lineart. Don't get me? See Apprentice Tutorials. Smudge the earpink into the fur more- use the smudge tool at 10px at 40% strength. You can also blur the earpink too using the blur tool or going to filters>blur>Gaussian Blur. Gaussian Blur is really good ;). You also have missing lineart in some places, and finally, add shading. Grab a color (Blue or Red is best) put it on the pelt following a light source, then lighten it with the opacity bar. Then blur or smudge it till it's nice and smooth, then set the layer to multiply to make it darker so it doesn't clash with the base. This is good for your first charart! 22:21, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

try a grayish redish pinkisk color for ear pink,  i dont think pastel pink is a good choise for catsWillowstep12 (talk) 12:46, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

There-redone it!



The lineart is a bit blurry, are you using layers? are there layers in your art program? -- 10:16, 4/05/201

You don't need to post a new image every time. Go to the tiny kit's file and find "Upload a new version of this file". Then insert your file and upload the changes. Then come back here and tell us you Reuploaded. 13:02, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

I reuploaded- this time I used layers!



22:14, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

That is better- but you didn't notice my comment. What I meant was you go to the kit's file name by clicking on the image and the file name. Scroll down and click "Upload a new version of this file". Insert the update and click upload, and come back here and indicate you reuploaded. You don't need to post the image again every single time. Blur/smudge the earpink at the end a bit, and you still need to add shading. Also, perhaps darken the shade of the earpink a tad too? 22:53, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Brokenstar (E) - CBA
why do i do these things to myself? 16:39, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front of him (legs, tail, face, etc.). 22:25, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:14, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

theres one little speck of waste on his chest fur -- 10:31, 4/05/2019

could you possibly make the fur vary a bit more so that its not as uniform and that it looks more natural? 12:09, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:56, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

is it just me or was the eye linear art removed?

no it's not just you, the eye lineart is removed it seems? -- 13:54, 4/07/2019

It's missing for me too. Scarlet, did you happen to erase something on the first layer? 14:43, April 7, 2019 (UTC)


 * Yes it is removed. I did that on purpose for the blinding scars around his eyes. It was like that on the old elder too 18:32, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, it's fine. It's for an effect and people have done that on other images. Since that's the only other comment this has had, I'm going to CBA it.

Ashfur (SC) ~ CBA
I think its alright to make his eyes green instead of blue? his eye color was never specified.... 19:13, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the --> ear? And yeah it's super minor so it should be ok :) 21:42, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Might just be me being dumb, but wasn't he listed with blue eyes? On his page it says he is. However, I'm not anyone of high status here so it doesn't matter much. -- John made it. He’s the only one. Rest of us… no.  But… I tried. In the end. I did.  23:58, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Where on his page? I just checked and there is nothing about blue eyes.. 00:25, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! And I looked, but I couldn't find any mentions of them being blue.. 15:12, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Oh, forget about me. I was looking at the wrong Ashfur... sorry to hold up your developments,  John made it. He’s the only one. Rest of us… no.  But… I tried. In the end. I did.  01:57, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 18:59, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to break CBA, but the shading is leaking away from the lineart in a few spots - at the base of the chest, > side of the belly, and at the base of the arm where it meets the tail. Also, I believe the light on the tail tip could stand to be defined

Re-Uploaded! 01:36, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Coolios. Re-CBA?

Tawnyspots (E) ~ For Approval
-- 10:37, 4/05/2019

Seems like there's a dorsal stripe on the star, and the stripes are thinner

there actually is a dorsal, it's just really undefined. -- 12:44, 4/05/2019

reups is this better? -- 12:58, 4/05/2019

smooth out shading?Willowstep12 (talk) 13:30, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

The thicker stripes here still seem a bit too thick. Try slimming them more? There also appears to be more stripes and longer ones on the og elder. And they curve more, too. 14:29, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

can you soften/smudge the shading and maybe expand it a little bit 19:58, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

reups -- 02:30, 4/06/2019

can you lighten/smooth otu the shading? 05:36, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Same shading comment here as on Nettlebreeze^^

reups -- 13:31, 4/07/2019

Could you elongate/connect the stripes on the flank/stomach area, the <--- front shoulder/forearm, and the tail? 19:08, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the > side of the tail some

Light-colored Thunderclan Kit (K)
helloo this is a minor character from bluestar's prophecy so em here.

Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 21:45, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

feel free to comment!

Don't thumb the image! Simply remove |right and that should fix it. Add earpink and shading to the back back foot, the shoulder on the front foot, and the haunch. Smooth out the shading, as it's very hard-edged. 21:54, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed the shading!

Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 22:16, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

I fixed the thumb. Don't do that in the future! Smooth out the shading more and expand it. Also remove "mod" from the file name.-- 22:44, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

I accidentally made the pixels bigger by alot, so I had to reupload it. Sorry for any inconvinience, but I'll try to work around it. Made the eyes have a bit more depth, tried to smooth the shading but not by alot. The image's name is BP.kit.lc Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 11:31, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be added/defined/expanded/smoothed out. The file name needs to have the kit's number, not the pelt color. You also somehow deleted Star's comment?? 14:07, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

The file name isn't important right now, a lead can always rename it once it's been approved. But if you'd like to upload it under it's correct name, it would be BP.kit-2.png (it's the light colored thunderclan kit, i believe?) Do you need a shading placement guide for this? I could provide one if needed. Can you smooth the earpink and add some eye depth? 15:10, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for reminding me Patch. The earpink needs to be expanded to the left. Also, before you deleted her comment, Star said for you to blur/smudge the pale parts on his/her face. Maybe enlarge the pupil? It's kinda hard to see atm. 15:39, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Silver Frost (E) ~ For Approval
pretty kitty 00:59, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light in the ear closest to us. 01:19, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:43, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm assuming your light source is heading < that way towards the cat, so remove the shading on --> side of the shoulder/forearm area, and ---> side of the haunch. 02:32, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit, please. ​​​

Reuploaded 23:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

define shading a little bit more on the ear furthest from us? -- 13:52, 4/07/2019

Hm. Vec's comment doesn't seem to have been addressed - the light source is contradictory as is. To most easily remedy what's there, the shading on the > side of the arm and the > side of the haunch, and any shading along the back that's further than the shoulder would need to be removed. Then, the shading'd be expanded to the tail tip, belly, < side of the chest, < side of the visible arm, along the backside of the cat and some reaching to the chin.

Tabby Warrior 1 (W) ~ For Approval
I hate doing the headings for these... 01:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

This may be hard, but define the tail shading a tad? It blends in with the brown. 01:44, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

could you dull that white down so that it looks like a pale part? also could you taper the stripes some?

smudge the stripes into a bit more of a taper at the ends, they're a little too paint-brushy 05:59, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

With all due respect, why can't I leave it white? I based this off my own kitty. Unless there's some rule with minor characters I missed...? 11:36, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Unless the character is described as tabby and white explicitly, adding white would be an assumption.

Reuploaded Uh... I tried. Also, RIP, sorry Misty that I couldn't make you a charart... If anyone finds a Leafpool-like cat with art to be done lmk? 23:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

There is quite a bit of waste outside the tail, and one small speck outside the chin/neck. 23:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

if there is supposed to be shading, could u define shading on the tail i can barely see it -- 13:58, 4/07/2019

Expand the shading on the < side of the lower back to curve down and meet with the pale bit down there - and remove the shading on the > side of the haunch, as the light source doesn't call for it.

Cloudtail (E) - CBA
MY PRECIOUS BABY I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. ​​

Smooth the shading on the tail tip?*yells* VIOLETSHINE RULES 00:27, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA?

Hoppaw (A) ~ For approval
dedicated to the old, somewhat toothless drooling 15 year old cat of mine. 00:04, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

There's a smol bit of orange leaking onto the nose. 00:29, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

its not leaking, its a multicoloured nose. 06:38, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded just changed a few things. 21:36, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Pouncestep (W) ~ For Approval
Decided to keep the kit design. Comments? 00:06, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you remove the eyelashes? 00:11, 4/09/2019

Woops. I use them for images I make for fun, and often forget to remove them when I use them (as a base) for official images. 00:16, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Exapnd the earpink? Heterochromia <3 01:28, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:36, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs? 01:43, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:53, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I actually think the shading could be lightened a tick or two on the front legs. 01:50, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Potato, you accidentally deleted my comment. 01:53, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, that was an edit conflict. Sorry!! 01:55, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Bristlefrost (A) ~ For Approval


Define the texture on the tail? 00:30, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Turtlepaw (App) ~ For Approval
Finally (partly) lucked out and got a new tortie character to make a design based off of my cat, Cassia. :D Unlike Cassia, she's only a tortie, not a tortie and white, so I had to design her as Cassia without the white patches basically. If it turns out there's a cite in Lost Stars for Turtlepaw having white patches I will be very very happy, but for now, have this. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:28, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the earpink a bit? Welcome back Jayfrost, haven't seen you here for a while (only in archives, alas). 00:29, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks. :D The earpink is on the whole ear, it's just partly obscured by the fur. I expanded it a bit to show the earpink more than the fur though. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:34, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Flippaw (A) ~ For Approval
00:37, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the brown on the back leg farthest from us? I need water because I'm too excited to read these and learn these characters. XD 00:39, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Hopefully that'll do it. 00:47, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Leafpool (Star)- for approval
yeah i have a bunch of tests and arguably more important stuff but look whos dead ohoho 00:53, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

forgot the white paws, will reup 00:54, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading too. I can hardly see it. 01:01, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

reup not willing to define it more 01:12, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

C'mon, Burnt, don't do that. I can't really see it, even with your recent upload. ​​​

Brighten up > this paw, as it looks rather gray atm. 01:23, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

reup i did try to define it last time and it kind of looked ugly when i darkened it more? could be my screen 01:26, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

this pixel could use earpink --Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:57, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

It does have earpink, which matches the other images. What are you talking about?

Her earpink is gray. 13:00, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

dosent she have an white underbellyWillowstep12 (talk) 13:03, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

she doesn't, she only has a white chest. also i cannot change the earpink unfortunately, because her other images have it at that color. could tweak the set but i doubt we'd need to 13:13, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Spireclaw (W) ~ For Approval
01:10, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Tone down the shading tint, as it's throwing off the black a slight bit. 01:14, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

What are you talking about? It's a perfectly acceptable tint, and I believe the old kit version used the same style. This looks like a normal black-and-white cat to me. ​

Can you define the facial shading a little bit? 20:12 Tue Apr 9

might be my screen but he's looking a little green on the black? also maybe soften up the transistion between colours a little. 20:59, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i didn't see any green. 21:18, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Flaxpaw (App) ~ For Approval


03:48, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs?  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:55, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

06:57, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? It looks flat. 12:09, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

maybe add some more leg and body stripes. 20:58, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Brightheart (E) - For Approval
such a classy cat 06:07, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Star) ~ For Approval
I borrowed Feathertail's linear art.

could you possibly make the tail a bit bushier? from what I've been told, a squirrel tail tends to be pretty poofy. 21:09, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

They are extremely poofy, and as this is, I don't feel it matches her other images too well.

Finchkit (TC) (K) - For Approval
i really like her name 09:00 Tue Apr 9 2019

Can u make her earpink a little brighter? (09:55, April 9, 2019 (UTC))--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:56, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think it’s fine - but if someone else agrees, I’ll tweak it 10:41 Tue Apr 9 2019

I actually agree, I can't tell that its there.  Ellie  life is an illusion 12:57, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I can see it and it could use some expansion. 13:02, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Stonestream (E) ~ For Approval
13:17, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Myrtlekit (Ki) - For approval
First charart! I'm absolutely in love with her name... Myrtle- is a good prefix. Juniperbriar (talk) 14:26, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good! ^^ Define the shading depth; this can be done by adding another layer of shading, but increasing the opacity and not having the shading extend beyond the first layer. You can kinda see it on the image above, on the shoulder and flank. Brightheart's elder is also a clear example. 17:48, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Might fiddle with the shading some more. Juniperbriar (talk) 19:51, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you redden/dullen the earpink a little? It's a little too bright for the pelt color. This is really cute!! 20:11 Tue Apr 9

Reuploaded. Thank you! I also messed around with the shading some more and I'm happier with it now. Juniperbriar (talk) 20:24, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

since you know what you're doing more or less, I'll promote you to an apprentice; you can use for approval for your headings now. can you define the shading a bit more while you're at it?

Reuploaded. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:47, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Shadepelt (TPB) (E) - For Approval
yeh 20:07 Tue Apr 9

Smooth the tail shading? 21:01, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Millie (E) - For Approval
I didn't have the file so I matched it the best I could 20:56 Tue Apr 9

would you like the file?

Squirrelflight (L) - For Approval
The Queen ugh this pattern 20:58 Tue Apr 9

Can you add her torn ear? 21:00, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think this might be a Wikia thing, but her eyes seem lighter than her other images? Also, I love the bushy tail, it makes me happy. ​

Maybe smooth out the shading on the <-- front leg? It looks really sharp compared to the rest of the shading. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:05, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the deputy that tail gives me life 21:52 Tue Apr 9

Needlepaw (SkC) For Evaluation
According to I reserved her before Ari, however, if I'm wrong and Ari has rightfully reserved her, please decline this! Tinystream (talk) 22:13, April 9, 2019 (UTC)