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Dark Whiskers (SC) - For Approval


The key word is blur. The shading and highlights must be blurred together to make the pelt smooth and not blotchy. Use the smudge tool and the blur tool together, do whatever you can to make it a blend of light and dark, and not patches of light on a dark pelt. Everything else looks fine, Shaf. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Just wondering, where did it say that he was black? His description on his page just says that he's a big, thick-furred tom. Bring the highlight on his forehead down a bit towards his muzzle. Scarlet wind Medicine cat of SolarClan 15:55, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

His page says "large, thick-furred black tom". Even check the allegiances of Long Shadows if you don't believe me. Shaf, are you still working on this? 21:47, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! My bad! Darken the shading his left, hind leg. Scarlet wind Medicine cat of SolarClan 23:19, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm still working on this. Forgot the date that the project opened again. :P--Shaf Girl  16:03, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the highlights profusely, but I think all that did was make them smaller and more prominent.--Shaf Girl  16:20, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look very small. Make them bigger and less concentrated-- 00:27, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I kinda redid the entire thing. :3 Shaf Girl  05:40, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. Maybe instead of brightening the highlights, you can just darken the shading, or try brightening the highlights to see what it would look like-- 06:20, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I don't think this needs any work, as for the highlights/shading. It looks perfect to me, and I don't understand where all the fuss is coming from (no offense, all). But I do agree with Night shine, the earpink should be lightened a bit and blurred. 23:31, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is just my computer, but the eyes look kind of flat. Try adding darker patches to the edge of the eyes. 01:56, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl  01:23, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and maybe make it a bit longer. 00:05, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see any falts with this:) Clarrissa   My Talk Page  18:31, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:43, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink-- 21:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Also, make it more triangular and consistent. 22:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights on the tail one long highlight. Mistfire Owl City! 03:58, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole thing 18:34, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Queen) -up for approval


Shade the strip of white on her back, where the shading ends. If the background is transparent, the shading should have no effect on the background. I see nothing else wrong. Nice job, Elorisa. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the back. 22:26, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I color-picked this, and it needs to be a very very light gray/silver. (barely white) Yours is completely white, change that, but other that and the other stated, it looks good. 22:28, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I am going to withdraw this because I have no time to do it, between school and other wikia duties I have. Someone else can free to work on this. 03:23, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

There's little left to be done; I'll take over. -- 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading along the back less blotchy. 03:31, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Everything has been blurred, the lineart has been fixed, and I've made it slightly more silver and less white. Is there anything else? -- 04:05, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. There is a white pixel on the haunch-- 04:31, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading can be made thicker just a tad more. 22:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Erm...Since Bramble left and Oblivion said that ppl w/ free time can do the ones Bramble took over I will take over...Snowbreeze 03:53, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded There...comments? Snowbreeze 04:05, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Daisy.queen.alt 20:24, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink, and make it less purple. 21:59, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded comments Snowbreeze 22:07, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Form the ear-pink into more of a triangular shape. 23:15, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded comments? Snowbreeze 23:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Center the earpink. It's WAAAAAY off. And it's touching the lineart. <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 00:10, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, and I would lighten it some as well. 03:00, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sagepaw (A)- For Approval


Blur all shading thoroughly, particularly that on the haunch. Other than that, very nice, Dovesong12. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the tail shading and the shading on the back. -- 20:31, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get right to it. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 15:50, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Had to rename it. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 17:02, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little.<font color="#6600FF">★ <font color="#3399FF">ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ <font color="#6600FF">★ 17:08, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Sagepaw.apprentice.alt, or it will not show up on his page when it's approved. 11:31, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights brighter. -- 20:07, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

This is his actual apprentice form, I'll rename it Sagepaw.apprentice. Will get to later. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:54, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, that's what I meant... so many people name the alternate apprentice images wrong, it was just automatic for me to write that. Thanks for pointing that out! :) 21:58, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more noticeable. 03:32, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'm getting to this, so please don't decline this, for I am VERY busy right now. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:00, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. 22:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could blur the highlight on the tail. 03:05, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

If someone needs to take over because of inactiveness, could I take over? Mistfire Owl City! 04:15, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Dovesong still has a few days to work on this -- 23:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Pouncetail (Alt. A) - For Approval


Setting 24 hours before approval. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

I can hardly see the shading and highlights. Umm, add more of them, I guess. 22:02, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the shading that they have, but I think that they should add a bit more, like down onto his bottom, and shade his tail. Then blur the shading and highlights. 00:07, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? 21:49, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

I will take over. -- 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I've added more shading and highlights overall. -- 04:15, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes on the shoulder and haunch longer, blur the ear pink a bit-- 04:30, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I can take over on this since Bramble is gone-- 03:24, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I made changes-- 03:43, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes more; I know it is supposed to be this way, but it looks too..blotchy like this, blur it only a bit more. Maybe add one tabby stripe on the chest. 05:21, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred stripes more, but I would prefer not to add stripes to the chest-- 05:34, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller. 02:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made ear pink smaller-- 02:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. 02:40, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't add a highlight to the haunch; I don't see where there is to blur -- 02:46, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the chest. 04:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened chest shading-- 04:08, December 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * Good job, CBA? 21:58, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink some more, it seems as if it is really big; maybe it's just me though. 23:14, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed ear pink-- 00:32, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. 02:26, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded defined tail stripes-- 02:41, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. A) - Withdrawn


Blur so that the pelt is smoothed, and not blotchy. Use the blur tool and smudge tool, whatever you can, to smooth out the patches of light and dark so it all runs together smoothly. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? If so, blur the shading a lot. 21:50, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

I will take over. -- 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Shading overall has been modified as well as blurred. I've uploaded twice, but there does not seem to be any change in the actual image. I will check back tomorrow and try uploading again if there is no change. -- 04:27, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I see the changes, I think. XD Move the ear-pink up so it isn't touching the line-art. 23:57, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight, blur the shading on the paws and tail. 02:26, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think this is the correct version. The shading looks much to blotchy. 01:00, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I see it fine, however, the shoulder highlight does need to be blurred. 05:19, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Since Bramble no longer wants to do images, anyone who isn't working on something can take over this. 20:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

If no one is taking over this image, may I do it? 21:33, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, make sure you reserve it, too. 23:13, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 02:30, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to smooth it out as best I could. Comments? 03:04, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading, lighten the ear pink a bit and move it up- 23:06, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Macgyver (W) - For Approval


All the patch transitions and ear pink must be blurred. Shading needs to be added; use the burn tool to add shading along the back, chest, tail, legs and head. You may want to withdraw this and work with our art tutorials on your own, to learn about shading, before you continue to work on this. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks very unnatural. Try using a different, less neon shade, and blur it as well. -- 20:22, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Rainear, are you still working on this? -- 07:11, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

I will take over. -- 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry if to be sounding like I'm nagging, but Bramble may I take over the image? You've taken over a lot of images since the project has just reopened and it seems like a lot on your plate. If not, thats fine since I know you can handle it as leader.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:32, November 29, 2010 (UTC) Blur patches.<font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 03:19, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if you'll understand but make the image softer. more shading and more buluring with some highlights as well.<span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gray;">Fiercestar <span style="color:goldenrod;font-family:Segoe Script;background:gray;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:goldenrod;">Leader of RiverClan 22:01, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Go ahead, Shimmer. That's fine by me. -- 04:01, December 5, 2010 (UTC)


 * Taking over this image now and I made a new version to make some of the patches match with his kittypet image. Also took the ear pink and eye color from that image as well. I know he's going to need a little more work before approval but just wanted to get this up before my school week began. Comments?-- ❄Shimmery Crystals❄  00:28, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add/darken shading. 00:53, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

blur the shading. 04:55, December 8, 2010 (UTC)



The way you did the shading interferes with the patches. Make it lighter and blur a ton, also make the patches look more like his kittypet image. (same place and what not) -- 05:12, December 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * His Kittypet image is from a different side and angle so the patches can't exactly be in the same place. I had the two images side by side when making the image. I play with the shading though-- ❄ Shimmering Snowflakes ❋  06:21, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there is a thick line of gray around all of the patches, get rid of that and blur the shading. Lighten the ear pink and blur it.-- 00:56, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall~Alt (ki)~


Ear pink desperately needs to be blurred; take care not to blur the lineart. Make the pink color fade into the gray, so it is not popping out. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Background also needs to be transparent. 03:35, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

ok i'll get right on itMaplepool 23:00, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is one pixel that you are missing; on the back foot. 22:50, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  hows that? Maplepool 23:01, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

oh i see a mistake allow me to fix it before you comment on it^^ Maplepool 23:07, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ok NOW you may comment Maplepool 23:13, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please rename it Birchfall.kit.alt.png there is an extra period there. Darken the shading, make the ear pink more reddish, darken the nose colour-- 04:33, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

You are still missing that extra pixel. Make the ear-pink smaller. 16:32, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 05:14, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

The backgound still isn't transparent. 21:43, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

um dumb question how do i make the background transparent? lol^^; sorry i dont know how...Maplepool 14:58, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

I can do it for you. 23:25, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

oh PLEASE do it frostheart...I have no clue how^^; and when you do tht i'll make the changes. Maplepool 23:54, November 27, 2010 (UTC) I WAS HERE!

nvm...i'll make the changes then frostheart,if she'll be nice enough,will make it transparent Maplepool 02:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC) I WAS HERE!!

 Reuploaded  there i did some extra and if frostheart will mke the background transparnet i'd owe her one ^^ Maplepool 03:10, November 28, 2010 (UTC) I WAS HERE!!

Make the ear pink darker. Also, make the highlights brighter and darken the shading. Blur the shading on the tail and on the haunch. -- 20:09, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Birchfall.kit.alt 01:55, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  gah^^; i already did Birchfall.alt.kit.png so to upload it i had to add the two...^^; embarssining... Maplepool 03:40, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the wait, I forgot. :P And I can't upload it, it reverts it to a past..photo. o_o So..I'll tell you how. XD You get the wand tool (looks like a wand. :3) and you click on the background. The kit image has a few loose pixels, so you have to click the strays and erase them. After you click the background, you select the erase tool and erase the background. 03:51, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

ok,thanks^^,I'll get it after school Maplepool 04:05, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  hows that?..i hope i got it... Maplepool 22:43, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

dang i didnt....hold on let me fix that Maplepool 22:45, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading along the edges of his fur where you made it darker. <font color="#6600FF">★ <font color="#3399FF">ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ <font color="#6600FF">★ 22:49, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  there ows that?

Make the ear pinks more even and triangular. 03:34, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded Hows that? Maplepool 22:21, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink fit into the ears. When we say "make it more triangular" we don't mean make it into a perfect triangle, but make it less blobby. Y'know? Also, make the earpink shade a little less violent and blur it a lot. 23:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  there hows that? Maplepool 01:52, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

The background should be transparent. Great image, though! 04:19, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  thre got it^^ Maplepool 13:24, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome job! =D There is something going on with the tail shading, though. There are scraps of shading and highlights here and there. Could you make it more smooth? -- 01:49, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks ok i'll get right on it Maplepool 01:58, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Once again, please rename it Birchfall.kit.alt 02:02, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I mean no disrespect,Oblivion,but,I can't see,I have uploaded this so many times,it goes to a past photo,so,I add the number of tries till it gets approved,so if I seem disrepectful,its just because,I can't do it...my aplogies... Maplepool 02:12, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  comments? Maplepool 02:12, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, thicken the shading, add shading under the chin. Rename it Birchfall.kit.alt.png -- 06:49, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

I cant it revets it to a past photo....Maplepool 14:01, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean? It should just overwrite over the existing one-- 04:29, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

While it wont!Im sorry it says 'this photo already exists etiher fix the name or go with one we have' ok? im sorry it just wont hacking work!god..sorry if im being rude,but this thingy going on with the names its,ANNOYING ME!....Maplepool 04:33, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay to overwrite the existing image. If it isn't named Birchfall.kit.alt.png it won't show up on his article-- 04:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  hows that? i added the shading under the chin,I just use a weaker brush....Maplepool 03:17, December 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * faceplam* missed the name hold on...fixed there we goMaplepool 03:20, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Desaturate the ear pink-- 03:23, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Erm stupid question again what does Desaturate mean? im like 14 and i dont remeber.....Maplepool 02:44, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturating is used with the sponge tool. It'll give you the option of either saturate or desaturate. Also, the shadin along the edges needs to be blurred more. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  03:21, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  hows tht? gosh i had to keep restarting god GIMP HATES ME NOW T-T Maplepool 05:55, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a lot more, darken the shading under the chin, make the ear pink more reddish, rename it Birchfall.kit.alt-- 06:19, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the background transparent. 01:10, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  *takes in breath* 'FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL EPIC FAIL!!!!!! 'Maplepool 13:39, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink could be desaturated or lightened, it's too bright and also needs to be blurred. Also, add a little more shading on the legs. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  14:24, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  hows that?...doesn't look all that bad now.... Maplepool 15:01, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tips of his fur and make the background transparent. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 15:25, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  Comment ferclily i shall upload Maplepool 15:40, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add more shading to the tail. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  15:57, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  comments?

Thicken the shading a lot blur it, add shading under the chin, darken the ear pink a bit. I suggest you make the nose colour dark gray-- 20:35, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded *takes in breath* '''FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL FAIL EPIC FAIL!!!!!! '''Nightshine,may i suggest a job for you? Book Editer/Crict,you almost made me miss doing my homework work on this,If i think/blur the shading hes gonna be black....

The shading is too dark on the edge of the fur, just lighten that a little bit... just a little. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  01:07, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to thicken the shading. I don't see how blurring the shading would darken it. Desaturate the ear pink- 03:56, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Question(wow...) How do I think the shading? and what i meant was,i keep on adding to the shading,it kept getting darker....Maplepool 04:09, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The background needs to be transparent. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

O.o i thought it was....the plxir background for transpaernt is there.....Maplepool 13:13, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

First off, lighten the shading on his left side (our right) using the dodge tool and then increase the burn brush's size. Then shade the left side of Birchfall again. As for transparency, you can see here on how to do it. Hope this helps! 21:38, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Erm...i use Plxir...not gimp....anyway Reuploaded Maplepool 21:57, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken the shading under the chin, blur the shading-- 02:24, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

If you need to, I can make the background transparent for you (I have GIMP). 03:06, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (A) - For Approval


Either lighten the shading on the back or get rid of the highlight next to it by darkening it. Then blur thoroughly. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sunspirit, are you still working on this?-- 07:22, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

I will take over. -- 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Define the highlight on the flank. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 21:09, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink 00:06, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are a bit too bright. Maybe shade them a bit.<font color="Black"><font color="Black"> <font color="Orange">Wolfwhisker  <font color="Black">Trick <font color="Orange"> or <font color="Black"> Treat   01:02, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble, are you still working on this?-- 02:33, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think since Bramble has retired, someone will have to take over. Could I continue working on this, if someone else hasn't already taken it? 00:29, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, Blackclaw, I have Tawnypelt (Alt.Ki) up for approval, and it's on CBA, and I planned to take over this because I've made all the changes for Plumwillow's apprentice image. You are free to take it, but...well, I worked really hard on the changes I made to her image, and I really wanted to take over it. There are a couple other images that need taking over as well, but if you would like to continue working on this, I don't mind. You asked first, after all. :) It's up to you. -- 01:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Since you have worked on this image before, I think you should take it instead. I'll just find something else to do. 21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, Blackclaw! :) It's a privilege to take over this image. I'll get to it and upload my version as soon as Tawnykit gets approved. -- 22:20, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Yay, Tawnykit's approved! I've uploaded my new version. :) Comments? -- 20:12, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur haunch highlights a little, otherwise it looks great :) ❋   Rainwhisper   ❋  21:16, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Rainy! :) -- 21:29, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and make it more triangular, make the haunch highlight a bit bigger and blur it-- 02:23, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Hope that looks better! :) -- 20:24, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink more, blur the haunch highlight around the edges-- 23:02, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Alt. Kit) - For Approval


Return the lineart to its original color on the face; it has been paled. We'll see how it looks after that. -- 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:48, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Fantastic. All I see is that the mottled spots could be darkened a tad. And the ear pink could also be darkened. 22:05, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:40, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

It sorta looks like the ear pink in the right ear is darker than the ear pink in the left ear. Can you fix that? If not, looks great! -- 02:48, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think the right ear is darker because of the shading. 05:37, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, okay. =) Never mind. Looks good. -- 20:19, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be darkened a little, mostly on the bottom. Otherwise, it looks great! 22:16, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:05, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin, lighten the right ear pink-- 07:02, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Very good! Lighten the right ear's ear pink. Other than that, it looks awesome! Maple  frost!   02:03, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:58, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the right ear pink more-- 04:48, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:00, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it more, I can hardly see it-- 05:25, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:47, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the forearms and tail, lighten the right ear pink more -- 02:32, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:30, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the right ear pink more so we can clearly see it. Maybe add highlights so it has more depth-- 00:54, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I think the earpink's okay now. The picture already had highlights, so I brightened them up. 22:26, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour-- 02:22, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ah, CBA is so close, yet so far away. 03:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour more, it looks almost the same as the colour of the muzzle-- 23:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mapleshade (W) - For Approval
Yeah, laugh it up, it's terrible. Bring on the comments! Let me guess, the orange is too bright? You know what, there really is an advantage to staying up late! XD 05:46, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches together more. This looks great!-- 06:15, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

As Nightshine said, blur the patches; right now they look too separated. This is fantastic! -- 20:19, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

The gray/black splotches look...kinda un-natural somehow. Maybe change the pattern, instead of keeping it as the dip and hill thing. XD Nice name I gave it, eh? 20:23, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

http://calicocat.info/calico-cat/calico-cat-1.jpg I sorta referenced off this cat. I want it to look like this. . . I love her pattern. I don't know. . . . xD I guess I can try and change it a bit, yeah. 21:53, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Dovesong. All I see that the shading ion the black transistion should be darkened, and all the patches should be evenly blurred together. Other than that, it's marvelous. 22:02, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and, like everyone else said, the transitions. Good job :) 22:04, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm re-doing a lot of it XD I found a copy with better shading, I guess I re-did and forgot about it, and also I think Frostheart is right about the patches so I'm changing them completely XD 22:08, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

VERY good but blur the patches like said they seem very um ah unreal to meal blur them that should fix it other than that its awesome Maplepool 23:05, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe try smudging the patches a tiny bit? It looks sorta cartoony. :3 16:34, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

I was going to, but then I forgot about it XD I'm gonna try changing the shade of ginger. . . it looks really bright to me. 21:44, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Umm, I tried again. . . better or worse? Not too sure about this. ..

Wow, this is wonderful! The only thing I can see is between that space between the forearm and haunch that's usually transparent is gray. Make that transparent again, please. Good job! Holly dapple  01:17, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! There's a smudge of gray on the tip of her tail that could be blurred a bit more. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 04:00, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I hate to bring this up because the charart is really good, but i just finished Night Whispers, and she was never accutally called a tortie, just white and orange. only the authors called her a tortie. This would kinda be like that alternate. 05:42, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

OH! Really? Well, I want this to be her official image and I am not to fond of this anyways, so I will change it and make her only white and orange. Thanks, Iceheart! XD 01:57, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'd just like to point out that we do create descriptions by what the authors say, so this image is completely fine. And no, that does not mean she needs an alternate orange and white image. 02:10, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

While we do create descriptions based on what the author says if she appeared in the book as orange and white than her main description should match. 02:30, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Dude shes tortie we go with what the authors say not the book if the book SAID it then is more than likely a mistake the the erins didnt catch nor the proof reader IF we must do a orange and white pic i may be her Alt image but,in the ernin hunter chat it was said the shes a 'big tortie she cat with amber eyes and is cold and decated to revenge' not ginger and white

lol sorry bout' the rant...^^; Maplepool 03:20, November 28, 2010 (UTC) sadly,I was here

Ummm. . . . no. We go with what the books said, not what the authors said before they published the book. They may have changed their mind, or described her as ginger and white in the books before the chat, then forgot and addidentally said she was a tortie. They always make mistakes like that. Yeah, if the books say she's ginger and white, she's ginger and white. 03:48, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

umm...no look at what Obloivion said....well mabye should we ask Bramble cuz none of us agree?(not a threat just asking cuz like none of us know...) Maplepool 03:54, November 28, 2010 (UTC) I WAS NEVER HERE!

I looked at what Oblivion said. . . . I didn't like mine anyways, so why not just do the other one? Oblivion, the authors once said Cinderpelt was pale gray but we never gave her an alternate image for that. When was it ever decided that we do do images for what the authors say in chats? And if she was only ever described as orange and white in the books, never tortoiseshell, then her image is orange and white, not tortoiseshell. 07:20, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine leaving it orange and white. Darken the ear pink. darken the shading on the orange parts, darken the tail shading.-- 07:27, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

It should be orange and white, because, as Mosspool said, the authors always make mistakes - maybe they changed their mind. She was mentioned as an orange and white cat all throughout the book, not just once, as a mistake. 07:30, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well,I asked Bramble,so hopefully we'll get this squared away...cuase im like very confused but,if she says it stays,lighten the earpink then blur it other than that its great^^ Maplepool 15:50, November 28, 2010 (UTC) I was never here YOU CANT PROVE ANYTHING!

I think you are all focusing too much on a calico cat, not a tortoiseshell. There are differences between the two; calico has distinct patches, while a tortoiseshell can be blurred together. Like this fellow here there may not be solid black in the pelt. If it is found later on (cough-Crookedstar's Promise-cough) that she does have black on her pelt, we can add it in easily. It's not like the images are set in stone. Keep it orange and white now (which still does count as tortoiseshell, theoretically) and we can decide what to do later if she is described as a tortoiseshell in the book. Dovesong, keep going on this version. 20:29, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck. 20:51, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ok,thanks Bramble^^ and,as i said before,lighten the ear pink then blur it 71.164.203.114 14:39, November 29, 2010 (UTC) IM BACK FROM KANSAS!!!

Phenomenal, Mosspool! ^_^ Blur the shading on the chest fur. -- 20:15, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hey guys, leaving the Wiki due to real life obligations. I guess someone else could take this over now. Sorry guys. 05:09, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Unless I have to get Sagepaw approved first, I can take over. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:56, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Dovesong, but you do need to get Sagepaw approved. Anyone else who isn't working on anything can take over this, though. 22:17, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oblivion this is a different Dovesong. She can keep this can't she? 22:36, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. I can take over. 22:43, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:14, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck/chest shading some more. 00:29, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's not going to look any different. 20:31, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ginger and white patches together a lot. 20:39, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't need MUCH blurring, it's just another style. Blur the shading at the haunch. 05:18, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Just so you know this will be my last charart before I leave the wiki. 19:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Aw you're leaving? We'll miss you. Darken and define the ear pink- 20:33, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'll miss you guys too. Fixed earpink. 21:38, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?- 21:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh noes! This image is a curse! Everybody who works on it leaves! Ahh! (I just linger) The ear pink is like, really dark red now, waaay to dark. 04:48, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's not a curse I've been thinking about it for a while now. About the earpink, you can never win with ginger cats. I don't think it's too dark and you probably wouldn't be able to see it if it was any lighter. 20:54, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear pink looks fine. Repeating 24 hours- 02:22, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Queen) - For Approval
So many things wrong with this charart...This is my first one for the project! 07:05, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the patch on the forehead a bit thinner, and darken the shading. Great image! 07:43, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more noticeable. 15:12, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It's barely visible. -- 20:50, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~ 23:13, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear-pink can still be slightly darker, other then that it's really good.<font color="#6600FF">★ <font color="#0000CC">ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ <font color="#6600FF">★ 01:54, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the ear-pink is still un-noticeable. Shouldn't you color in the nose? 04:27, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~ 05:45, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the patch on her paws a bit more. 20:36, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the stomach a bit more. 04:27, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patch on her lower haunch by her tail a bit more. Looks lovely so far! <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 17:39, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can you darken the ear pink a tad? It looks a little light to me. :) -- 20:16, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear-pink color is fine. 00:19, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind then...XD. Darken the tail shading maybe? This is amazing! -- 01:45, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Daisy.queen.alt 02:04, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~ 03:42, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit more. Rename this Daisy.queen.alt.png. There is a white pixel on the forearm. Darken the shading some more-- 07:04, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

The small piece of line-art near the shoulder (not the shoulder, near) is faintly gray. 01:54, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There's a white pixel near her front left leg. Fill that in black. B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!

Smudge the white near the head part more. 23:55, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~

Define the ear pink, rename this Daisy.queen.alt.png -- 05:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

There's two alternate Daisy's. I don't want mine to get mixed up with the other.

Well, there are, but they're both for the same ThunderClan Daisy. :) That's a good point. See what some other users think about it, maybe. In the meantime, I think the stomach highlights could be blurred a tad more. -- 21:44, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

~Reuploaded~

Darken the shading on the white patches- 02:29, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the ear-pink isn't touching the line-art. 05:16, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Mistflower said on her userpage that she is leaving the wiki, so is someone going to take over the image? 21:59, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

If Mistflower is leaving, anyone who's not doing anything can work on this. I've also changed the character pixels box to have two alternate queens, so this image can stay named as it is. 20:33, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'll take over. 03:03, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Fixed earpink and darkened shading on the white patches. 04:27, December 15, 2010 (UTC)'''

Make the ear pink a little smaller and darken the shading on the white areas more-- 05:34, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Palefoot (W) - For Approval
Comments? <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  14:05, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Add a few smaller stripes to his shoulder and haunch, lighten the ear pink and make it a bit bigger.-- 17:54, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading on the back? Looks superb! -- 20:21, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink could be slightly bigger, other then that it's really good :)<font color="#6600FF">★ <font color="#3399FF">ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ <font color="#6600FF">★ 22:26, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the tail. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 03:58, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is me, but there seems to be a very thin line of shading and then a 'fat' brush of shading again. This is located on the chest area, could you blur or fix that? Add some shading to the back legs. 04:53, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  16:42, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's beautiful, Rainbreath. ^-^ Can you blur the shading on the back and also blur the ear pink? -- 20:19, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink as well-- 06:23, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading 03:36, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  13:34, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't shows the right picture on my pc. =( The right picture is the one with the lightest ear pink. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  13:41, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading.

Oh that was me ^ ^. I forgot to sign. 03:57, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blured the shading. Is it better? <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  15:34, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading more. 21:27, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading in his chest a bit more. Otherwise, very nice. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 15:22, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Center the earpink a tad more. This is amazing! 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  13:27, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up, blur the chest shading more-- 02:21, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm very happy =D <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  14:15, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing. Comments before approval? 15:41, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. L)- for approval
Comments? 23:20, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Good job. =) Blur the shading all around. -- 23:24, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the background transparent as well. 23:57, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink.-- 00:27, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink and shading a ton, and maybe make the highlights brighter. 00:41, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blue the ear pink. 05:52, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make his nose the same color as the ear pink. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 05:08, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

No, don't make it pink, just make it a lighter black. Usually black cats have black noses. 18:46, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

We have a black cat (he's semi-ours) and his nose is more grayish. Mistfire Owl City! 18:52, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

For some reason it always just shows the old version. I'll try to reupload it again later and see if it's working. 05:03, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I hope you've thoroughly blurred it in the new version, because that is exactly what it requires; blurring both on the ear pink and the pelt. 09:01, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Blackstar.leader.alt 02:05, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded GIMP won't let me blur it anymore. 02:16, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it should be able to..make sure the blur rate is at 100. Rename it Blackstar.leader.alt. -- 02:18, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink bigger-- 04:26, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure you can't blur it any more? Right now, the contrast between the shading and the highlights is very sharp, making it look...separate. -- 20:54, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are you at least able to blur the earpink? 01:14, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The earpinks should match. The right one is more skinny. 22:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should fill the entire ear, and make it more red. 23:45, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't have to fill the entire ear; it's optional. The colour is fine. 02:06, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Kittypet? 02:09, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mosspelt (Alt. Q) - For Approval
Comments? ❄Blizzardfur❄ Albino Beauty❄  18:20, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Excellent work! =) Blur the shading on the back, blur the ear pink a bit more and extend it higher to the tip of the ear, and make her a bit more golden-brown; refer to Brackenfur, for example, if you need help. She looks somewhere between cream and orange right now. -- 20:04, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ❄Blizzardfur❄  Albino Beauty❄  21:19, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 21:26, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think it looks any better :/. ❄Blizzardfur❄ Albino Beauty❄  21:38, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back a lot and make the highlights a little brighter, mostly on the face. <font color="#6600FF">★ <font color="#3399FF">ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ <font color="#6600FF">★ 21:43, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink so it isn't such a bright colour. 21:54, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ❄Blizzardfur❄  Albino Beauty❄  22:14, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. 00:18, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Darken the shading a bit and blur it. -- 00:20, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I had to redo the shading and highlights ❄Blizzardfur❄  Albino Beauty❄  00:45, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, and maybe make it a little less fushia. 03:27, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the back and belly look like stripes. Lighten and blur well. 09:20, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded There! It looks WAY better! ❄Blizzardfur❄ Albino Beauty❄  18:19, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back and on the tail. :) Also, blur the shading on the front paw. - 20:36, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded :D B  l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  22:34, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and change the eye colour; it's a little too aqua to be normal. 05:21, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot and darken the ear pink. -- 07:05, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded B  l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  17:34, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish. I don't see a light source in this; thicken the shading.-- 04:25, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better now? B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  17:14, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think you are trying to make the light source come from the left. Darken the shading in the areas I marked with red. Make the ear pink look similar to that colour.-- 21:09, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Night shine, can you give me the hex code for the earpink colour? I'm having a hard time trying to find something similar. B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  17:09, December 6, 2010 (UTC)<-- Never mind that. B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  17:21, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded :)? B  l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  17:20, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more around the neck and belly. Blur thee ear pink a bit more-- 00:18, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything overall, it might be just me, but everything looks quote blotchy. 02:21, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, it was just my brain tricking me. :3 15:30, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded B  l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  18:42, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy to me. Perhaps darkening it could fix it. 22:45, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the shading and highlights. It was blotchy because I edited it a lot :/ B  l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  23:34, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. Center the ear pink. -- 02:27, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I carefully smudged the different blues in the eyes together for effect. This is NEVER gonna be approved .-. B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  03:18, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose color a darker shade of gold. And Blizzardfur, be patient, some chararts take way longer--two months to be approved. 05:07, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot in the areas I designated in the redline above -- 05:16, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded This has better work... B  l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  16:15, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, mostly on the shoulder. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  20:21, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 21:36, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

It stills needs to be blurred a lot more. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  23:48, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I would darken the shading first. Then blur it, like Rainwhisper said. 00:51, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink lighter, it looks sorta burnt orange right now; the colour Nightshine originally gave you was good. 05:15, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was blurring for half an hour -.- (I HATE the blur tool). My head is telling me to withdraw this... <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 01:56, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The back shading is slightly inconsistent. Make it more smooth. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened it then did it again. Maybe I won't withdraw this after all! <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 18:16, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make it much smoother. 20:40, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded O_o... <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 21:20, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, it looks the same. Be right back while I fix this. <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 21:21, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind. It's fine. <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur everything thoroughly. 01:55, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did you want me to blur the lineart too? Just kidding ;) <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 18:16, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and darken the haunch highlight some-- 22:59, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woooooooo, that REALLY helped... Blur tool makes things worse in my opinion. <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 23:27, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

You should probably smudge it-- 23:38, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A) - For Approval
Okay, here he is. He's kinda bad right now, so comment fiercely! I shall improve him! 03:22, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten and define his stripes, so they look more like the warrior image's. 03:26, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit. I really like the stripes =) Lighten the shading, it's a little dark looking, but also thicken the shading-- 03:29, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

There is some blurred line-art on the chest. 03:31, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the eaar-pink BUT lighten it,and as Ice heart said ligthen the stripes then define them and fix the blurred on the chest other than that nice ^^ IMPROVE HIM FRECRELY THEN!!!!! Maplepool 03:53, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't need lightening. 05:08, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

At least blur the stripes; to me they look wispy, not like tabby stripes. I actually think the ear pink should be darkened a bit, only a bit mind you. And the shading looks like of ... pressed and flat for the want of better words. It doesn't give me a 3-D effect. Sorry if that's too unhelpful! 13:54, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Minor tweaks have been made. I didn't have time for everything. Will work on it later, but it's midnight here. Comments? 08:03, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded (again) Better? 01:49, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

The line art looks kind of blurred along the forearms. Thicken the shading-- 02:06, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Howzat? 23:16, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, thicken and darken the shading, and define the stripes on the chest. 01:51, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? 05:55, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Something about the tabby stripes looks a bit..odd..They look sort of smashed and around them, it's kind of blotchy. Maybe blur everything a lot, then define the stripes, especially on the belly and legs. :3 15:29, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lol what do you mean, smashed? I think they look fine. 03:47, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, on the back and haunch it's fine. But the face stripes, the belly stripes, and the leg stripes..look. 'smashed'. XD Too blurred and smooshed together. 15:05, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading/brighten the highlights. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been so quick to update him, but I assure you, I'm still here. I've just been really busy. Will work on him soon. 03:14, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't look the same as his other image's. They're too blurry. 22:17, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Pikepaw (A) - For Approval
For the page, Pikepaw. Crystalstar999

I've moved this image to the right place. Please sign with four tildes when you're on a talk page. Do rename this image as Pikepaw.apprentice.png. Remember to place the image as full sized, which I've done too. As for the image itself, the shading on the haunch and that on the belly is a little intense. Just lighten that and then darken the image overall, because it looks like a pale gray tom, not a dark gray one. Otherwise, great job! =) 13:50, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darkhallows has already reserved this image. It will be declined. I think Bramble will issue a 24 hour ban -- 23:52, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Um sorry if I'm contradicting you, but I really think this shouldn't be declined. Darkhallows' version of Pikepaw was already declined. Doesn't that make it allowable for someone else to create his charart? Please correct me if I'm wrong. 10:56, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'm just an apprentice. XD But even though Darkhallows's was declined, this Pikepaw is being declined because Darkhallows still has it reserved on the PCA chart. Basically, whether the image was declined before or not, if it's on the chart, you're never supposed to put it up for approval if you're not the user that reserved it first. At least, that's what I remember :) -- 20:32, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, Shady's image was declined due to lack of work shortly before the Project closed. I didn't know about it, so I reset her current project like I did the others to the 23rd. But, as she's stated she'll be inactive indefinitely now, and the image was declined and should have been removed from the current projects table, the image is fair game. This can stay up. Thanks for saying something, Starling. If Crystal no longer wants to work on it, someone else can once the week is out. The only thing I see right now is that the eye needs color. -- 04:39, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rename this Pikepaw.apprentice 17:21, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

I personally think the shoulder highlight should move down a bit, just enough so it touches the top of the forearm. This is fantastic otherwise, though =) -- 20:48, December 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * I think the highlight looks fine where it is. If others disagree with me, then change it. 22:47, December 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * I also just noticed Bramble's comment. I'd be willing to take it over once this week is over. 22:50, December 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * There's blurred lineart on the shoulder - fix that. And darken the shoulder shading. 23:35, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is she still working on this? <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 16:48, December 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * No. I've taken over. 21:44, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Comments? 00:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Make the ear pink bigger and blur it. Darken the arm shading some-- 00:52, December 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Thank you for the compliment. Which arm, exactly, should I fix? 00:56, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Both of them-- 01:00, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Does this look better? 01:08, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear-pink up and make it a tad bigger. 05:14, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (Alt.A) - For Approval
Comments?<font color="#6600FF">★ <font color="#3399FF">ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ <font color="#6600FF">★ 03:30, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is too big. 03:32, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur it. Darken the shading and add shading on the tail. 13:08, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''<font color="#6600FF">★ <font color="#3399FF">ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ <font color="#6600FF">★ 21:33, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more noticeable, and center it. 23:29, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''<font color="#6600FF">★ <font color="#3399FF">ⓇⓐⒾⓝⓌⓗⒾⓢⓅⓔⓇ <font color="#6600FF">★ 23:48, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the haunch and blur the rest of the shading. 04:25, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  22:45, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink a bit more-- 07:07, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  14:47, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights if there are any or darken the shading more-- 04:23, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  14:37, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a teeny-tiny bit smaller. :) B  l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  17:36, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  20:40, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. 20:42, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:02, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Wow Rainwhisper, this looks great! :) Could you darken the ear pink a tad? -- 21:07, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded... again. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:35, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is kinda hard to see, make it pinker. 04:02, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:22, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit more and blur it-- 00:12, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  00:48, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the ear-pink isn't touching line-art. 02:19, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Fixed it. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  02:32, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Move the earpink up and make it a bit bigger. 02:54, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:17, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great. Blur the shading on the haunch a bit. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  15:45, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:16, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch higlight. 02:22, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights or darken the shading-- 02:24, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great. I think the hightlights should be brightened. 02:52, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  03:06, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred ilne-art on the ear. 16:20, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''I think I got it. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  16:35, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art looks a bit..'fat' near the ear. :P Fix the line-art. 21:05, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front of the haunch- 21:11, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Meh:( the shading won't blurr anymore, or else it'll get darker and blotchy. As for the ear, I tried the best I could to make it un-fat. ❋   Rainwhisper   ❋  22:20, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight some more-- 00:51, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It can't be blurred anymore. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  01:59, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I can't understand how it can't be blurred anymore. Try blurring it and if it doesn't work I'll try-- 20:31, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''What I meant was, if it was blurred it would start to look... weird. I just decided to redo the highlights, so how does it loook now? ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:00, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's better now. Lighten the ear-pink. 22:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  23:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is excellent! Blur the earpink a bit more. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  13:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)'''

Blur the highlights. <span style="color:aquamarine;font-family:Papyrus;background:thistle;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♥Moonleaf☽ LuvsLeaf-bare!♥ 18:43, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the highlights are fine. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:02, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome! =) Darken the ear pink a tad. -- 21:14, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded :)  21:41, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?-- 02:20, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt. KI) - For approval


My first charart! I spent a ton of time on it ^^". Cinderheart's alternate kit form -- she was described in Sunset as 'looking exactly like Cinderpelt (dark fluffy gray)' instead of gray tabby. Comments?  Maple   frost!   19:40, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 20:57, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose; gray cats usually don't have pink noses, and rename it Cinderheart.kit.alt 21:03, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights to the tail. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:11, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Move the highlight to the chest and add highlights to the fronts of the legs. Mistfire Owl City! 21:39, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. What now? :)  Maple   frost!   00:05, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a little more. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  00:06, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

* coughs* Rename it Cinderheart.kit.alt, please. 01:23, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

* Facepaw* Sorry... I was being an idiot xD. I named it Cinderheart.alt.kit... ugh... Sorry, I'll rename it when I re-upload it (in a few minutes when I finish editing)  Maple   frost!   01:53, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! (/Is very glad she re-read her post before clicking save page. That would've been an embarrassing typo.)  Maple   frost!   02:00, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is an extra period after alt. You just need to name it Cinderheart.kit.alt, it will add the .png to the end on its own. Sorry for the lack of image-related comments, I will once you name it correctly ^_^ 03:33, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Uggghhh xD sorry... you have permission to cyber-punch me. I know, I'm exasperating. It's part of my internet charm ^_^ (NOT). Okay... it's named right, now. I think... xD. Maple  frost!   05:20, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Change the nose color to a darker gray. 17:15, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading thoroughly. B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  17:39, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Maple  frost!   19:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look... mismatched and blotchy. Can you try and fix that? ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  20:43, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks crooked. -- 20:44, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple  frost!   23:23, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading thoroughly. 23:26, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are they too strong or something? I keep getting told to do that... they're as blurred as they possibly can be, so are they just too strong? Maple  frost!   23:34, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The nose is still a bit pink. And no, they're not too strong. You need to blur them, they're too blotchy. 04:01, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the nose completely black/very very dark gray? Or just darken the current pinkish-gray nose? Maple  frost!   05:05, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose colour a dark gray -- 00:12, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I fixed the nose and splotchiness. It doesn't look splotchy anymore ^^", thank goodness. I'm sick of the Blur tool. xD  Maple   frost!   17:53, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks really blotchy to me. 21:24, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Me, too. There are scraps of shading and highlights everywhere, and looks a bit disorganized. Also, blur the tail shading a tad. -- 21:26, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? Maple  frost!   21:57, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Now it looks how it did before XD Blur it mostly on the chest area, but on the legs and the tail too. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  22:07, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Would you want some help with the blotchiness? 04:41, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

-Sigh-... Whenever there's blotchiness, there's something I like to do called... REDOING THE SHADING AND HIGHLIGHTS. I just fill 'em in again and redo the shading and highlights and hope it works. B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  04:03, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

If they redo the shading and highlights, it may make it more blotchy, with the Pixlr blurring. 05:05, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

The earpinks should be a bit more consistent. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I completely restarted--been working on this nonstop. :D I think I got it fixed. Comments? *Crosses fingers* Oh, and please give me little details, too--like, say, the eyes are a bit to greeny-blue, etc. Don't be afraid to point something like that out--I want you to. I'm trying to become a great Charart member :).  Maple   frost!   06:28, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Much better, Maplefrost. :] Make the nose lighter and blur the ear-pink more. 01:53, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll go work on it now :). P.S.--Has nothing to do with this, but... can ANYONE tell me what happened to Bramble and why Oblivion's now leader? It's like one day I logged on and Bramble was listed as leader, then suddenly Oblivion... and I can't find anything about it. I checked PCA news, tried the (confusing) forums, and even poked around on Bramble's profile... nothing. On his/her (I think last I read Bramble's a her xD) profile it still says 'I'm the leader of Project Charart, yada yada yada".  Maple   frost!   03:45, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Read the discussion on "New Leadership" in the discussion area. :3 03:50, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, I read it :) congratz on being new Dep. Humm... does that look any better? Note: For some odd reason everytime I clicked 'overwrite existing photo with yours' ('cause I have to name it Cinderheart.kit.alt), it would say 'success!' and I'd click 'return to editing', yet it would look exactly the same... I tried to get it to work about ten times, to no avail. So now I'm just crossing my fingers that it'll show the 'right' new one.  Maple   frost!   04:25, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the shading-- 22:58, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Brightheart Alt. Apprentice~For Approval
Not thrilled about this one. I think I'm gonna make her scars bigger. Comments for improvement? <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 20:15, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The entire side of her face was torn out; you're right about making those scars bigger. 20:21, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rename the image Brightheart.apprentice.alt. 20:25, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the tail. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  20:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There's quite a bit of spots where the lineart is blurred, particularly her whiskers and the middle of her forearms. Also, I took a quick look at her other chararts, and the tail isn't completely orange; there's a bit of white at one end. -- 20:42, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the ginger patches are in the same spot as they are on her other apprentice image. -- 21:17, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I also blurred the highlight on her shoulder. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 21:21, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There's still a ton of blurred lineart, on her tail, arms, face... 21:31, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did you see my above comment?-- 21:57, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Okay, I basically redid the whole charart. Nightshine, yes I got you comment, but it didn't show up until I had posted the edited charart. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 03:10, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

For the ear-pink, shrink it a tad. The ear is torn, yes, however, the ear-pink size shouldn't enlarge. And the patches should still be in the same spot as the others. 04:00, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moved the patches around a bit and made the ear-pink smaller. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 01:33, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be way smaller still; it shouldn't be touching the lineart at all. 01:57, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 02:14, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think you understand what I'm saying. The earpink can't be touching the lineart on the sides, not just the end. On yours, it seems to take up her whole ear. 19:57, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That look better? <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 02:42, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Now it's not even there.... look at her apprentice image, and use that earpink, just with a ripped ear. 22:03, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patch on her tail and the front leg farthest away from us. Otherwise, very nice! <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:17, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry it took so long, I had an english paper to write. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 01:52, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Um...sorry if I sound daft, but I can't see any scars.... Apart from that, I'd just blur the patches a tad. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  18:33, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

This may be my computer screen working up, but I can't see much shading, if any at all. If it isn't just me, use the blur tool to darken and/or add it. 20:50, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add a ginger spot to the leg 23:12, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art on the back leg is blurred, I think the patches are blurred enough. 23:16, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Doesn't it say that it took, like, all her ear off? Make the ear smaller. <font color="Orange">Wolfwhisker <font color="Black">Trick <font color="Orange"> or <font color="Black"> Treat   23:26, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the shading and made the ear smaller. Icy, I didn't add a spot to her leg since there isn't one in her first apprentice charart and I'm not sure which leg you're referring to. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 00:33, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the patches, darken the ear pink, make sure there is no blurred line art, make the patches more like the ones on her apprentice image-- 02:22, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Desaturated the orange patches, darkened the ear pink, and made her scar a bit smaller. Should I add in some darker, claw marks on her face? <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 22:56, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think you need to, there aren't any on her queen image. Blur the patches on the forearms and tail, darken the shading, -- 00:50, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Start the orange closer to the base of the tail. 05:11, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the shading, blurred her patches, and move the orange on her tail. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 15:20, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...maybe add a deeper red to the center of the scar to give it some more emphasis. The pink that rings around the outside is just the flesh, but the red on the inside will definately show that it's a life changing wound. Just experimenting, you could give it a try if you wanna. 20:27, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white areas-- 20:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Darkened the shading on the white ares. Moonwillow, I did try your advice, I'm not sure I did it very well/like it, but I tried. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 21:02, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

I can scarcely see any actual scars. Try adding some/making them more prominent. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added some scars around her eye. Scarletwind 03:21, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

The scars sort of look unnatural. Try making them more curvy and less blotchy. 01:51, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Tumblekit (Alt. Ki) ~ For Approval
Here he...er...she is! My first charart. I wasn't sure if I named the file correctly, but just tell me if i didn't, so.....comments? 19:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Tumblekit.kit.alt. There is a white pixel on the top of her head, fill that in, and blur the shading. 19:34, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: I fixed the head dot thingy majigger, and i blurred the shading as much as i could. 19:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the ear pink. 19:44, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the blur pink even. Also, the shading and highlights look out of place; try to fix them. -- 19:57, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Done, Done, and sorta done. I tried to fix the shading and highlights, but I'm not sure if they're....good or not...but i did my best to fist the earpink. 20:24, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour. This looks great!-- 20:26, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks much better. :) The highlights on the shoulder...maybe fix them? The highlights should be on the chest. :) -- 20:29, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: I fixed the nose pink and did my best to blur the highlights on the shoulder. I also added the highlights on the chest....I stand accomplished. 20:33, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit on the right side of the chest highlight. Maybe add a small highlight to the tail-- 20:40, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading down by his paws, I can't see the lineart--either that or my eyesight is dying... <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan

Nah, your eyesight still lives, Scarletwind. :) Lighten the paws and also lighten the face; I can't see the mouth. -- 23:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Erm she looks Crossed-eyed Snowbreeze 01:36, December 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * Good job, lighten the shading. 21:33, December 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Updated: Fixed. Comments? Sorry, I won't be on AS much....so this wasn't updated in a while. 00:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks great. Comments before approval?-- 02:19, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a ton. 15:30, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think the highlights look fine. Repeating 24 hours-- 22:57, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but they look just splattered on the chest to me. Darken the shading in that area and blur the highlights. 23:02, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Splashheart (L) - For Approval
20:08, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest and haunch highlights. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  20:10, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, I can hardly see any. Blur the shading, blur the ear pink, add nose colour. Does Splashheart even need a leader image? He was never seen as a leader-- 20:11, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose a dark gray, not pink. 20:13, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The leader guidelines were already decided, and i think this qualifies. Bladd more shading to the eyes. 174.7.99.84 20:18, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry that was me. My computer logged me off. 20:20, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 20:47, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The size of the ear pink is fine. I'm pretty sure it's supposed to fill up the whole area-- 20:55, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I thought it should be smaller since that's how the ear-pink is usually shown on most other leader chararts. add a small highlight to the face. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 21:00, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Splashheart became a leader? When? Blur the highlights, making it look like the highlights are smoothly fading into the pelt. Mistfire Owl City! 22:06, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Try to blur the tail shading in particular. It's smooth, but the transitioning needs work. -- 23:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

On the left earpink, there is a tiny little smudge of lighter color. Blur that in so it looks consistent. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, but it's not showing the changes yet. Please don't comment until I say the image is fixed. 21:02, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, it's done now :) 21:03, December 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * Good job, Oblivion. I think the tail shading should be darkened, and blur the ear-pink. Also, the head-shading should be darkened as well. Great work! 21:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Icestorm :) 21:49, December 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * No problem. All I see now is that you have to darken the arm shading. (I'm on a roll with shading!) 22:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:11, December 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * Beautiful now. Comments before approval? 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and brighten the highlights a bit. Blur the chest highlight and tail highlight-- 00:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the highlights, actually. 03:20, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

He looks black instead of dark gray. 22:14, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
This is a major fail--especially the ear-pink. XD Comments? 00:30, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad. :) The ear pink is crooked, and the front paws could be shaded more. Willowshine's eyes are blue, and is her nose supposed to be that color? -- 00:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter. -- 00:39, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried fixing the size of the ear-pink; not sure how that turned out. XD Darkened shading on fore-arms, I think the ear-pink colour is fine. Also, the eyes are blue, and the nose color is supposed to be that colour. 00:42, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Usually light grey cats have a lighter colour, but anyways, the right ear pink needs to be centered. 00:46, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Tried centering it, beware, I said tried. 00:52, December 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * Very good job, Frostheart! Darken the shading left side of the body, and on the head. This is great by the way. 00:55, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- 01:00, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. 01:43, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 01:54, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:58, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading on the tail go to the other side, since the light is coming from the left. Darken the shading some more-- 02:18, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:24, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. I'll let y'all decide which one is better. 03:59, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right better. -- 04:02, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

These are amazing! Personally, I think the left one looks better, but if the right one's shading is blurred a bit, it will look better. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree, I prefer the one on the left. On that, I think you should blur the arm shading. Other than that, marvelous. 21:30, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, I love the one on the left. It looks incredible! :) I think you should blur the chest shading. Great job! -- 22:20, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the one on the left is better, but like i said before the ear pink seems a little orange to me. 03:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, left onen wins. :3 Any more comments? 01:50, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour a bit, darken the shading, brighten the highlights a bit more as well-- 02:18, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think the nose colour is fine, and when I did darken the shading and brighten the highlights, everyone preferred this one, so I'm keeping it as is. 02:20, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Just like it was with the alternate Ivypaw image, it just looks too flat to me. If everyone prefers it this way though then I guess it's fine...-- 02:26, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Feathertail (alt. W) ~ For Approval
Fingers crossed this one has no reason to be declined :) Comments? 04:35, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has to be declined. Oblivion told me that being flecked and a tabby were not nearly the same thing, so this shall be declined. 05:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Flecked and tabby are way different! Where's the logic in that? 05:32, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, that was rude. I apologize. But truly, I believe flecked and tabby cats are tonnes different. 05:40, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Iceheart, I'll let you keep this because I feel bad for declining your other images :) Blur the markings a lot. 11:59, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mkay. :) Also add more markkngs, and darken the shading on the legs. 15:26, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on the chest, darken the ear pink, lighten the tip of the tail-- 22:55, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sunstar (Alt. L) ~ For Approval
- My First charart in awhile. Haven't seen me around much, have you? ;) I'm pretty proud of this one. I need to blur the ear-pink, I think... By the way... This is my first leader! ޓ  S u n  s p ir it  ޓ  Santa Paws is coming to town! |undefined 05:54, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate it a bit, make the ear pink fill up the whole area and blur it. Brighten the highlights some and blur the shading around the neck-- 06:02, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I'm worried about the highlights... are they too... unnatural? ޓ S u n  s p ir it  ޓ  Santa Paws is coming to town! |undefined 06:30, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur the highlights a bit, and/or make them bigger. Also, the ear pink looks very non-existent. Take the ear pink color from Sunstar's alternate deputy image. 06:47, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Nightflower =) It's nice to get a compliment once in awhile =3. The highlights in this picture are really bugging me -_- ޓ  S u n  s p ir it  ޓ  Santa Paws is coming to town! |undefined 10:06, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more noticeable and blur the strip of shading on the leg that is second closest to us. 15:27, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his right foreleg. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 22:03, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened ear pink and blurred strip. II'll get on to blurring the right-foreleg shading. ޓ S u n  s p ir it  ޓ  Santa Paws is coming to town! |undefined 22:22, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more, get rid of the white pixel on the ear tip, make the highlights on the chest and haunch bigger-- 22:53, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

=Discussion Area= Use this area to post join requests, questions, and general discussion.

Forum Question
Please go here to comment - your input is much appreciated right now. -- 21:26, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

New Leadership
Hey everyone. I have decided that due to dwindling motivation from me and the fact I have done this for more than a year now, I will be retiring from the leadership position of this Project. Oblivion has agreed to accept the leadership from me, and so I will be changing the membership table a last time and then I will no longer be editing this Project. I wish you all well and hope I did a semi-good job while I was leader here. Adieu. -- 19:02, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

You were a wonderful leader, Bramble, even though I wasn't here the entire duration of your leadership. I wish you well. I know you've left the Project in good hands. :) 20:33, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sniff... we'll miss you, Bramble. Mistfire Owl City! 20:44, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Even though I haven't been on the site for a while, you were a great leader and I respected you a lot. :] ❋   Rainwhisper   ❋  20:50, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

You were an amazing leader, Bramble. We will all sincerely miss you, and congrats Oblivion. :) 20:53, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble! You were a sincerely fantabulous leader, and we will all miss you. :'( 21:49, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Bramble, congrats on your retirement and I hope you can live a less stressful life from now on. ;) I know Oblivion will be a great leader. 22:18, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Bye Bramble. I have only just joined this project but I have seen all your art and it excellent.

I wish Oblivion luck 22:57, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble :(. I'm sure Oblivion will do well ^^. Darkhallows... Mew? 23:21, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Everyone will miss Bramble... She was an amazing and devoted leader, and I know I'm sad to see her go. I've decided on the new deputy, and it will be Frostheart. Congratulate her, everyone :) 23:31, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much, Oblivion. :) I will do my best to serve PCA. 23:33, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations Frostheart! You're going to be a great deputy. :D ❋   Rainwhisper   ❋  23:44, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Even if I never contributed to PCA, I can only imagine how demanding it was to coordinate it, especially for such a long time. I admire Bramble for her dedication to PCA and to the wiki over the years; and I wish good luck for the new leaders. 05:18, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Congrats,Frostheart,you earned it,Good luck,Oblivon,Frostheart you will be a great deputy Maplepool 15:08, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble will be missed by everyone. She did alot for this project, and it is sad she is retiring. But I wish Oblivion and Frostheart the best of luck to run Project Carart to it's full potential. <font color="Orange">Wolfwhisker <font color="Black">Trick <font color="Orange"> or <font color="Black"> Treat   17:25, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Bye, Bramble. You were an amazing leader. Your name will be engraved in the history of this wiki forever. Frostheart and Oblivion, I can only tell you how much I look forward to having your guys' leadership in the times ahead. =) Congratulations! -- 19:12, December 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Goodbye Bramble, as you were my second leader of this project. With you as leader I have watched this project changed tremendously, from members, art work, set up and deputies. I'll always remember the moment you told me you were making me a senior warrior :) and it's hard to believe that's been over a year ago. I know how the project can be stressful and asking for lots of work to be done. May StarClan light your path whereever you touch next. As for, Oblivon, I guess its around time I get to knowing my third leader now as I've been gone for a while, so congrats =)-- ❄ Shimmering Snowflakes ❋  19:29, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Goodbye Bramble... you were an awesome leader of PCA. I will miss you, and I'm sure everyone will. Thank you for being such a wonderful leader of this project. You will not be forgotten, in all of our hearts. I wish you good luck in the future, and may StarClan light your path. And congrats Oblivion, on the leader position. I am sure you will do a great job. And also to Frostheart, for becoming deputy of the project. I'm sure that both of you will do an amazing job! And farewell, Bramble. Thank you so much for everything you've done for the project. 23:10, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Farewell, Bramble. You were an amazing leader of this project and I learned a lot from your comments. I'll miss you. You were always so great with advice on art. May StarClan grant you many moons of rest. <font color="#ff0000">Scarlet <font color="#6bc3f0">wind <font color="#37e06b">Medicine cat of <font color="#e8cf2a">SolarClan 01:57, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'll miss you Bramble. Congrats to Oblivion for the leader position; she's going to be an amazing leader. I feel it in my gut :) Also Frostheart will be a great deputy; she's very skilled. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I haven't joined this Project, but I know how great you are, Bramble. We'll miss you. Congrats Oblivion! You deserve it May StarClan light your path wherever your paw steps follow :) Nightfern Merry Christmas 01:10, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Goodbye, Bramble. You have been leader of the project ever since I joined, and I'll never forget you. This project has evolved ever since I joined over a year ago, and I must admit, sometimes I find it hard to keep up with it. :) You were an excellent leader, and we all thank you for everything you've done. Good luck, Bramble.

Congrats on becoming leader, Oblivion! Congrats on being deputy, Frostheart! I know you'll both do great. :) 02:54, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'd like to join
Can I please join? I want to start making chararts of my own.Phoenixfeather13--StarClan&#39;s Agent 21:45, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I've moved this to the correct spot. I'll add you in right away, Phoenixfeather :) May I suggest looking at the basic guidelines and some tutorials? Thanks for your interest in joining. 23:42, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble's Images
So now that Bramble has left, the images she took over are available to be taken, I'm pretty sure-- 03:23, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Or would Oblivion take over the images Bramble has? She's the new leader now, it would make sense, however, it's Oblivion's call. 03:39, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

How about all the images Bramble has taken over can be withdrawn, and whoever isn't doing anything can take over it? It would be just like it being declined; whoever takes over it would re-do it and make it their own image. Just a suggestion; I'm open for input. 17:32, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

That sounds good.-- 19:51, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sounds like a good idea, fair to everybody. :) 19:53, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome. I like it! -- 22:02, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

GREAT! i can do my frist charart^^ Snowbreeze 03:49, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

May i join?
Hi i am Feathermoon, and i was wondering if i could join?

thanks, just post back on my page!

Hi Feathermoon! I'll add you in now. You should take a look at the basic guidelines and tutorials. Thank you for your interest in joining! 17:43, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Can I Join?
Um, can I please join Charart?Fallowstar--Queen of Ocean&#39;s Waves 15:36, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, Fallowstar. I'll add you in now. May I suggest taking a look at the basic guidelines and tutorials? Thank you for your interest in joining. 17:50, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

New Forum Topic
Please go here; I'd really like to see your input on this topic. 17:54, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hi im just putting this up for approval!

Iv only been in Project Char-art for nearly six hours and iv been practicing so hard on my tabbies! Next im going to try a Tortie

Not as good as the current firestar, but maby it is!

Feathermoon, first of all, Firestar already has a leader image; he doesn't need another one. Next, there is a reason that the heading of this section is "Other Discussion". You put chararts for approval in the proper section. I'm glad that you've been practicing your charart skills, but this is not the place to post them. Thanks, -- 22:55, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Also, Feathermoon, if you want to do a charart, I would suggest looking here for cats who don't have one. Although there are no available chararts to do at the moment, there will be more soon. 00:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Joinging?
Hi! Im new,I was browsing around and i saw the chararts,they are so cool! I want to do stuff like that,may I join? Snowbreeze 01:44, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'll add you in now. Take a look at the basic guidelines and tutorials, thank you for your interest in joining! 02:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

You didnt add me to the table xD Snowbreeze 03:55, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I added you to the apprentices list. But that reminds me, I shall add you to the reservations table. :P 04:27, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Joining
Can I join as an apprentice? ♫Rain willow♫  13:30, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'll add you in now, Rainwillow. Remember to make a new heading next time. May I suggest you take a look at the basic guidelines and tutorials? Thank you in your interest in joining. 23:00, December 13, 2010 (UTC)