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Shellheart (D) ~ For Approval
-- 23:11, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink is quite a bit neon-ish -- would you mind trying to match it to the other images? Also there's random white pixels floating throughout the image. Eye depth needs to be defined also b/c I can't see any

Smooth out the shading on the main body and tail. 14:29, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Fixed -- 17:27, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink a bit more, and try and make the shading look like it's separate from the image. As it is now, it looks like it's taking the pattern and... absorbing it, for lack of a better word. You should be able to see the pattern through the shading, but I can't with this.

Fixed This probably looks worse than before; #1 reason why I wish Pixlr had Gaussian Blur :/ ;( -- 23:54, August 11, 2016 (UTC)

Shelly's ears still look a bit off. Change the colour, maybe? --

Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" 05:47, August 12, 2016 (UTC)

Fixed -- 14:57, August 12, 2016 (UTC)

It seems that you've colored over the lineart on the --> front paw and it also looks slightly blurred on the back two paws. Also, can you smooth out the shading on the very front paw? It looks like straight brush stroke on my screen. The shading is also leaking away from the lineart on the heels of both back paws, on the back, top of the tail, and the eartips.

Fixed -- 17:13, August 13, 2016 (UTC)

Actually, the lineart is still being colored over by a few pixels on the fromt paw furthest away from us. On that paw, there doesn't seem to be any shading or patterning. The shading is still leaking on the backs of both heels, on the back, the eartips, and at the top of the tail. The eye color is also much darker than the other images, so could you perhaps color pick it to align?

Fixed -- 17:27, August 14, 2016 (UTC)

Waste all over the image. Also, I'd suggest using another program, as pixlr has many shortcomings that make the creation of charart almost impossible. I'd try gimp, which is what many user (myself included) use; it works alot better and is free to download. 19:28, August 14, 2016 (UTC)

Why are the chest, muzzle, and tail underside pale? There aren't pale parts over those areas on the other images - I mean, there are some lighter dapples there, but there are also darker ones as well, they're not solidly pale like here. Also, could you define the shading a little? 21:29, August 16, 2016 (UTC)

Fixed -- 15:42, August 17, 2016 (UTC)

The image still has waste all around it, and the underside of the tail is still pale.  ~ Silver Cloud ~  19:16, August 17, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe try to match the patterns of the other images better, because this looks much darker/more dense than the others by far.

The shading seems very random - which direction is the light supposed to be coming from? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:12, August 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the eye depth? 02:44 Mon Aug 2016

Still working? 00:28, August 24, 2016 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  21:50, August 24, 2016 (UTC)

I'd like to take over, if possible? 23:08 Wed Aug 2016

Re-uploaded 13:17 Thu Aug 2016

Do you think you could define the shading on the legs just a touch? Nice image. 23:39, August 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:17 Sat Aug 2016

Add more shading at the back of his tail. A tad too little shading I think. -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 01:25, August 27, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading goes up a little too high on the belly, recede it a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:02, August 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Technically, Neon, the shading would only be so much on the tail because of my lightsource. My lightsource is shining literally on almost all of the tail. 14:04 Mon Aug 2016

Sweetbriar (Ki) ~ For Evaluation
I sucked at this TBH, definitely with the smudging and blurring and the chest. I copied Sweetbriar's queen onto GIMP and copied the colours then discarded the copied image of Sweetbriar. Not that GIMP was being nice to me, messing up the colours. I also learned today kit images are so damn hard to make. Morale of the story: Kits suck, both in personality and looks. --

Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 07:50, August 18, 2016 (UTC)

lessen the white on her paws,and it should be a patch on her chest, not the entire thing. 09:16, August 18, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload Also, should I darken the shading? I put it at 50.00 layer opacity. (I do layer opacity rather than pencil opacity, pencil opacity is messy IMO.) -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 06:30, August 19, 2016 (UTC)

You can choose whichever method is easier for you. I use layer opacity myself, as I can never get pencil opacity to work properly on my images. Also, for reference, the base is #967758, and there is a slight texture on the image, although it's very hard to tell because of the stripes. Speaking of those, the color is #291004 with the layer on "multiply" and the opacity of said layer at 65%. I do still have the .psd for this handy, so I'd be more than willing to send this your way if you use a program that can access these files and you feel okay with me having your email address.

Re-upload Went through the idea to darken the shading. Now it's a 60.0 opacity. I would be fine with giving you my email but  me is pretty sure I have nothing to process a .psd. Thanks for the colours, though! I kinda redid the stripes because fill would cover Sweet(kit)briar's face and make it look blotchy as I added the stripe colours. I'm not sure on what to do with the texture, though. Where do you guys see it? (and also although my use of me is pretty incorrect I've used it for four years so YOU CAN'T STAPH ME) (edit: Noticed I didn't leave a sig. Oops, here it is and with the wrong date!)

Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 22:28, August 19, 2016 (UTC)

For your future reference .psd files do work with GIMP. Anyway define light on the tail

Smudge the stripes?  ~ Silver Cloud ~  15:28, August 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload The stripes are smudged, but I couldn't do it too much unless I wanted a really blurry image. I was toying around with the rate and size for a rather long time. Also reduced the white on the belly because there was too much obscuring the stripes and it scattered little dirty faint white marks on the stripes and fur. Also darkened the shading a bit more and holy god Sweetbriar looks like a phantom with 100.0 shading opacity. Right now the shading's at 65.0. --

Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 22:28, August 19, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps blur the edges and f the white some so they fade out more, since it looks a little sharper than her other image

Re-upload This good enough? Still playing with the rate and size. I tried blurring at size 2 and rate 60. 80 makes her look like a blurry mess, me thinks! --

Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 00:34, August 20, 2016 (UTC)

Possibly add some more shading depth to your image? Put some more, darker shading onto another layer above the current shading layer, and just use it around the edges where not a whole lot of light would shine, to wherever your source is coming from. Also, it does appear that the queen image you have to match has a slight texture to it, which I'm assuming is from smudging the stripes and shading slightly, @Skye? You might also have to add a few more stripes along the legs and back area. 02:51 Mon Aug 2016

No, there's an actual texture below the stripes, but it's really faint.

REUPLOAD -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 06:14, August 22, 2016 (UTC)

The shading looks really dense, and I can't distinguish anything underneath it. Could you perhaps lighten it a bit and then make it a bit more of a gradient? Also, with the light source the shading seems to go a bit high up on the tail and looks a bit squiggly on the <-- paw.

Smudge the white chest a bit. 00:28, August 24, 2016 (UTC)

Didn't post on the 23rd cause I was really sick. Anyways, Reupload -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 05:50, August 24, 2016 (UTC)

I still think the shading is really hard-edged everywhere, and especially on the paws.

RE-UPLOAD This is the best I can do. -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 06:43, August 25, 2016 (UTC)

I believe you still need to add more stripes throughout the image as well as the texture needed to match the queen image. 13:39 Fri Aug 2016

Re-upload redid the stripes. The right side (right to us left to sweetbriar) hasn't been drawn in so I get to pick what she looks like around there. Woop! -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 02:10, August 27, 2016 (UTC)

The top of the white looks like it's covered over a bit something? Might just be me. Also, the white on the back paw looks like it is leaking away from the lineart quite a bit. Maybe define the texture a bit to match the queen more, and define the shading on the neck area.

I'll try doing it this afternoon - my day is very busy today. -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 21:39, August 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload did it yesterday but forgot to upload it, woopsie! -- Neon Skylite "Just take a chance with me!" (Talk Page!) 07:39, August 30, 2016 (UTC)

Hmm...I think the white on the chest could be smoothed out a bit more as well as the earpink, as it looks a little too defined. 11:49 Wed Aug 2016

In addition, I think the earpink extends down a little too far out of ---> ear. 20:02, August 31, 2016 (UTC)