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Guardian Cat Blanks ~ For Approval
Is this right? I don't know what to name the file, or the heading. I can change it later if needed. But thanks everyone who voted for me!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:41, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure how approving a blank works, but I would wait until someone who has been here longer than me says how to name it. Anyways, could you make the ears a little longer on both blanks? Many cats have longer ears than what is shown on the blank. I think that's how comments on blanks works. I would wait until someone who has seen a blank approved to comment before you do this though. (Just to make sure I'm commenting on this right). 12:08, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

The front legs should be longer and the front paws flatter CØØKIE (talk) 12:22, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I believe  the heading needs to be Guardian Cat Blanks - For Approval. Can you make the inner lineart a bit thicker? (If that makes sense) Most of it appears to be 1px

the eyes should be somewhat smaller, and maybe make the longhaired tail more fluffy. it is long fur, after all. 16:12, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe the nose shouldn't be connected to the eyes, or spaced out a bit more? :) 17:56, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Don't know a lot about anatomy, but I think it only looks connected because of how the face is situated/the direction the cat's head is facing?

I think it's ok, when the eyes get made a bit smaller there'll be more distance to represent the bridge of the nose. maybe make the nose slightly smaller too 18:25, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Make the tail a bit longer.

The left front leg looks a bit smaller and squished than the others. 16:57, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

I'll upload later tonight, sorry for such a wait for the past couple days. I'll rename them gc.long.png and gc.short.png when I get the chance tonught and thanks for all the critiques. I appreciate it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:30, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, Cosmo, can you rename them guardian cat.long.png and guardian cat.short.png? 00:07, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yes I will. Also, I'll need to upload them under two different files as I realized it as these are only under one file. I'll get around to that sometime tonight or tomorrow! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:08, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

It's good, Cosomo. Blanks are not held to the same time restrains as regular images are; that would be impossible, due to the fact that anatomy is difficult and forcing someone to produce a new blank in a short amount of time by restricting them is just asking for rushed and sloppy work. Doesn't mean you can take two weeks to upload though, it just means that the one-month limit does not apply here.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks for all the nice comments and sorry for taking so long to upload. I may edit the eyes again. They still bother me, lol. But I think it's looking better! Also, uploaded with two different files and renamed them with the proper naming, and thanks to Appledash and Jaycie for being so kind about this! It means a lot. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 23:21, October 24, 2017 (UTC)

You're doing a great job, Cosmo! Anyways, could you make the tail on the short-haired blank end a little thinner? If I know one thing about cat anatomy, it's that a cat's tail becomes thinner as it nears the end of it. 01:17, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

Make the eyes a little wider and more oval, and space them out a bit. Also I feel like the hip should be wider on both. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 12:54, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ears should still be a little bit smaller and more pointed, the lineart around the paws is still a little thin, plus the front paws seem....small for lack of a better word? like when you look up a cat sitting down, you know what I mean? 04:34, October 30, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for taking so long to upload. I got caught up with homework, and then I got really sick. Hopefully, I'll upload tomorrow!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:42, October 31, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I still think the face is way off. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:55, November 2, 2017 (UTC)

to match the style of the other blanks, i think you should make the fur tips less round, if you get what i mean.

Could you widen the -> eye on both blanks by like one pixel? It looks a little off to me compared to the other eye. 10:20, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you thicken the paw lineart just a bit? Particularly the two front paws. And this is beautiful! :D 13:37, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the eye lineart? ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

I think the thickness of the eye lineart is fine. On all of the other blanks, the eye lineart is one pixel thick, so why make it thicker here? 22:55, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps make the nose(s) a bit smaller?

When will be introduced schemes of shadow on this chararts if chararts be introduced in wiki? I can not wait to start making Fierce! ::::D – 14:14, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Please don't comment unless it's a critique. I know it's taking a while for me to upload each time, but please be patient. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 14:31, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''These are turning out much better. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:28, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

they are, dude. I think you should thicken the linear art on the tail a little bit.

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:58, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Thicken lineart on paws and ears

I think the ear lineart is fine, but agreed on the paws ^^ These look awesome so far!

I think the cheeks are a bit too wide, maybe make the face a bit more narrow? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 16:46, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

The right hind leg seems to be sticking out to far. Maybe narrow it. Gosh Cosmo this is a great blank! 13:30, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:30, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Bring the line for the left (our left) cheek on the shorthair to the right a little, it's still a touch too wide. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:43, November 17, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:08, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

So the short-haired blank's legs are a bit more straight, while the long-haired ones are slightly curved. Is this intentional, or allowed? Lmao I've never been around for any blanks being approved, so I'm not very sure. Sorry. <span style="">00:45, 11/19/2017

I see what you mean now. I'll fix them to curve a little bit to match the long-haired. And then I'm gonna thicken the neck and shorten the hind leg on the short haired blank as well.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:49, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you make the <- ear on the long-haired blank match the short-haired's ear? And perhaps thicken the ear lineart on the short-haired blank as well. These blanks are really coming along! 14:43, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

Nectarpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Sweet name.

Can you define the shading on the back paw furthest away from us? 14:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading on the left side of the face should be moved to the right, since that looks like where the shadow is coming from on the rest of the body, also define the shading on the front paw furthest from us. 18:15, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on two paws furthest from us

re-up Light source is from above, slightly to the right, if that makes sense.

Since the light source is from above, can you add a little more shading to the chin and neck area? 18:12, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little on the legs closest to us. 15:54, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Might fix some things.

Smooth out the shading on the head a bit! Purdue!! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 06:00, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Thanks!

Cloudmist (Alt. Lo) - CBA
Yup – 15:43, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth those dark patches of shading a little on the belly and hindleg furthest from us, the white on the back paws and belly look a bit gray. 18:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups – 09:18, November 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the back leg furthest from us. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:06, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups – 06:52, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking a bit from where the neck shading meets the front leg shading. 18:28, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the neck shading and define the shading depth on the head? 00:35, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eye colour is leaking a bit? Nice Job! ErmineGlow (talk) 13:18, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

What means "leaking"? – 14:10, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reups – 14:19, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Erase that one black pixel underneath the chin. 15:58, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reups – 05:48, November 17, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Dragonfly (Lo) - Declined
Eh.. 17:12, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on every leg?

Can you define the stripes a bit? 00:27, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:28, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading a smidge? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:58, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. <span style="">22:02, 11/15/2017

Still working?

Declined due to lack of work.

Sandynose (W) - CBA
This really sucks :^/ <span style="">09:36, 11/12/2017

Define the shading on the sll the legs except for the front one closest to us. --ErmineGlow (talk) 15:50, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define/add stripes on the legs?

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:30, 11/12/2017

Re-uploaded. Color change. <span style="">23:37, 11/12/2017

Define the leg shading a smidge? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:58, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Can you specify please? Like, all the legs? <span style="">05:41, 11/14/2017

Yea. All of the legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 05:46, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:32, 11/15/2017

Define the lighting on the tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:19, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

There is light. Its just hard to see bevause of the dorsal stripe, but if other's agree I'll see whar I can do about the tail. <span style="">00:41, 11/19/2017

Oh there's a dorsal stripe on the tail? I'll fix that on the kit then! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:51, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

Haha, yeah^ It's just slightly difficult to see because of the way it blends in, but its there. <span style="">05:59, 11/19/2017

CBA?

Fringepaw (Lo) - For Approval
Wow, sorry for deserting the wiki! I'll try to be more active. 01:59, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the facial shading a bit? I know it may hard to see it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:57, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Cosmo! 03:13, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Waste. :P 00:16, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light a little on the tail and hindleg furthest from us. Maybe smooth the shading a little, unless it's supposed to be a bit bold. 17:57, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Gravelpaw (Lo) - CBA
This isn't very good but don't worry about it

Smooth out the shading.

reups redid the shading

reups again messed with texture

CBA?

Sandynose (App) - For Approval
not sure about this shading... 17:54, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly define the sahding on the ginger parts of the front legs? Also, I think the tail shading would be switched, but I'm probably just tired idk.

Re-uploaded. the shading is supposed to be coming from the bottom, so the tail should be good. 01:03, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the ginger bits again? ErmineGlow (talk) 02:26, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on the warrior seem softer than these ones are. I think Broken might have blurred those ones a bit more.

Re-uploaded. 06:38, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

The texture was meant to be (idk how to word it) invisible of sorts, but this seems too defined. The darker texture layer should be at 11% while the lighter texture layer should be at 18% <span style="">19:27, 11/17/2017

Re-uploaded. 13:39, November 18, 2017 (UTC)

I guess per broken, the tail needs to have a dorsal stripe. Didn't realize it, lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:15, November 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 14:36, November 20, 2017 (UTC)

Twigbranch (W) - CBA
All colors from her other images. Comments? 00:52, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on her legs. 00:57, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth and define the ear pink

Reuploaded. The shading on these blanks is soo difficult. 01:03, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't match with the other images in my opinion. They seem more darker. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:22, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

I think it's just the size; iirc, Bluestar is the OA of her other two images, so I think all of Twigbranch's colors should be the same.

CBA?

Dewpaw (Alt A) - For Approval
hi

Define the shading a bit?

He looks more dark brown then just a neutral brown. <span style="">20:46, 11/17/2017

Pretty sure that if the shade isn't specified, you can choose whichever one you want.

Shade is my choice unless one is stated. Actually, Broken, the base color is the one you used on your version. I liked it.

I'm honored!! :o Anyways, can you soften the haunch shading? <span style="">22:52, 11/17/2017

Re-uploaded. I think it only looks that hard because there's also a stripe or two at the edge of the haunch lineart.

Palepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
Can't decide between Litten or Rowlet. 16:34, November 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the chest? And Litten. Because Dark/Fire is the best. <span style="">16:40 Fri Nov 17

Smooth the haunch/flank/whatever that triangle of shading is next to the -> leg. Also Rowlet, because grass/ghost beats all

Reups I chose Litten in Sun, so I might pick Rowlet this time just for a change of scenery? Ended up redoing the shading because I didn't like it. I'll go back and smooth out the chest shading in a bit. 16:59, November 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Sorry, flank shading, whatever it's called 17:03, November 17, 2017 (UTC)

If you didn't notice, there's a bit of black on the left side of her chin on the apprentice image. Other than that, this matches well

Reups Whoops! Didn't see that. Thanks, Fox! 19:45, November 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Smoothed some of the shading 19:09, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the shading on the hindleg. Looks cute! 14:37, November 20, 2017 (UTC)

Sandynose (Ki) ~ For Approval
I love doing kits. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:28, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs please. Great job! ErmineGlow (talk) 13:11, November 20, 2017 (UTC)