Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 75

Brackenfur (Alt W2) - Approved
Tried a new stripe style with this one. Not sure about what I was supposed to name the file - just let me know if I need to change it. Comments? 02:51, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit, I can't really see it.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  03:40, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

File name's correct. Blur the shading more. 03:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love the stripes. Define the hanch and face shading. If the face doesn't have it, add it in, cause it looks a little bit flat. 05:23, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty :3 Darken the shading. 05:53 Sun Oct 30

Re-uploaded. 19:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the ear-pink. 19:28, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you take off a few brown pixels on the front left paw where the brown meets the white? Maybe it's just me, but I think the paw should look mostly white. 19:31, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not really sure what you mean, Squirrel... I think the paw looks pretty white to me. 21:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think I get what she's talking about. On the paw she referenced, it looks like there's less white, when compared to the others. 23:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still so confused... left paw looks exactly the same shade of white as every other one. 23:42, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, no. Not the shade of white used, but the amount of white on the paw. It doesn't seem like there's the same amount. 23:44, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Like... say he was wearing socks. His left sock isn't the same length as the other ones? Because white paws don't have to be the same. 23:46, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Good reference. Yes, that's what I'm referring to. And they don't? Never knew that. You learn something new every day. xD 23:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, check out this. 23:58, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

You need to darken the shading and the face white looks to..odd. IDk it just looks odd to me. 01:17, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, the shading and face are fine. 01:18, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the paws. This is so pretty <3 01:20 Mon Oct 31

Re-uploaded. Aw, thanks :) 01:28, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? This looks lovely. 07:07 Mon Oct 31

Sorry, but can you define the light/highlight on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:30, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink DJCandyBud 04:01, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -headdesk- 00:58, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Approving. 20:26, November 2, 2011 (UTC)