Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 70

Larkwing (BS) (Alt W) - Withdrawn
All colors are from the app and kit, which I'm the OA of, so I got them directly from that file.

I'm sorry to make you do this Define the tail shading? 08:00, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Damn tails.

Define the head shading some more and define the light on all four paws. And I hate to do this to you, but expand the tail shading at the bottom of the tail so it covers the whole base of the tail, and then define the light just a teensy bit more(as in like a pixel more) as you get to the tip. Damn my queen tail is just about a pixel or two thicker! Lol. 12:45, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tweaked the tail (a bit) and head shading, but I'm not adding any more light to the paws, as I think it's fine as it is. There is light on the paws and to define that any more would probably make it seem blotchy and then I'd get asked to blur it. The tail shading on these is a lot harder than they are on the queen blanks, and there's nothing else that can really be done to define it more without putting unblurred shading on it lmao.

Define the shading everywhere but the tail? 09:19, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

I may actually redo the shading when I'm more awake, so hold that though for a bit.

Re-uploaded. Redid most of the shading.

Darken the shading everywhere except the tail. Not too much though. 03:03, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define it a little bit more? 16:18, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Neutral gray cats annoy me. I'm withdrawing and someone else is welcome to this if they want.

I'll take over. Will reupload soon. 17:18, 10/13/2014

Reuploaded. Since changes aren't showing, look here 18:09, 10/13/2014

Changes should be showing now. 19:12, 10/14/2014

Smooth out the shading.

Withdrawing to work with new blanks. 00:10, 10/15/2014

Archiving.

Stoatfur (BS) (Alt A) ~ Withdrawn
last person didn't put a date so I think I'm allowed this? anyway.........gold star for trying?? 07:33, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. This is lovely! 08:09, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Definitely a gold star. It's gorgeous! =) add more ginger on the face in that solid gray patch for the alt w has more there. And then smudge all the ginger a bit more. -gives gold star- 11:46, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Very nice. :D Smudge the markings just a smidge, and give the facial shading a bit more shape following the face - and recede/lighten it a touch. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:30, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define all of the shading just a little bit? I /know/ it's there, just having a bit of a hard time seeing parts of it. 7:57 PM, Sat Oct 11, 2014

re-uploaded defined it everywhere but the white since its easily visible. thnx guys 00:57, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shaded part of the paws looks a bit too grey. 17:46, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

i dont see how? you can easily tell theyre still white. 23:14, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Which way is the light coming from? If from the front, define the tail shading a bit. 21:28, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

its coming from the back.......... 23:24, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and face.-- 01:26, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded. 05:15, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Gonna agree with Sorrel's earlier comment. Just lighten the shading on the white a tad. 12:57, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Shading looks fine tbh. 19:18, 10/14/2014

Withdrawing 00:14, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Archiving.