Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Silver Stripe ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? This is my first nomination! 22:18, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Oh, good job ^^ Can you add some PoS quotes? All of them are from MFV right now. 22:20 Mon Feb 22

This might be all nit-picky but... Some thing to consider fixing:
 * In the MFV section:

The last 3 sentences of the 1st paragraph are short and fragmented, perhaps combine a few?

The last sentence of the 2nd paragraph is a major run-on, perhaps split it in two?

The 2nd and 3rd sentence in the 3rd paragraph are worded weird, perhaps rephrase?

In the 4th paragraph there are multiple excess commas, and Clan is not capitalized in one instance. Some excess links in there too. :3

In this sentence, "Meanwhile Moth Flight mentions her when she thinking that Honey Pelt will get stuck in a rabbit hole, like Silver Stripe, if he sneaks out of camp." I'd add 'was' between "she" and "thinking"

In the second to last paragraph, please capitalize Gathering, and also "Begging her mother to let her." is a bit of a fragment?

Sorry it's so much...It's just I noticed so..You might wanna glance over the POS section as well.

Updated I fixed what you said Spooky and I added in some quotes but I can't give page numbers as I don't have a physical copy is it possible for someone else to do that? 22:43, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Added page numbers ^^ 22:26, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Thanks ;) 23:04, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Shade Pelt ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? His is really short. 23:25, February 22, 2016 (UTC)

Add some quotes, please. 23:41 Mon Feb 22

Updated tbh he's only mentioned a few times so I added 2 quotes, as the rest were just little comments of his. :3 00:11, February 23, 2016 (UTC)