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Firestar (Star) - Tweaked
Tweaked to add scars. OA was myself and tweaked from an older version. 17:34 Tue Jul 23 2013

He looks like he's pale ginger. Darken him to match his other chararts. Wonderful job! 15:13, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:06 Mon Jul 29 2013

He still looks pale ginger. Darken him more? 21:11, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 1:52 Wed Jul 31 2013

He doesn't look so much pale ginger to me, it's just the base doesn't quite match. I think saturating it a bit more might help, but I'm not sure.

Reuploaded. 2:39 Thu Aug 1 2013

Crouchpaw (A) - Tweaked
Oa was Dazzle; tweaked for flat shading. Changes may not be showing 21:28 Thu Jul 25

Can you lighten the shading a bit, I cannot see the lineart. 02:00, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups 08:05 Wed Jul 31

Crouchpaw (Ki) - Tweaked
Oa was Rainwhisper; same as the apprentice. Changes may not be showing 21:28 Thu Jul 25

See apprentice, also, could you blur it a bit? 02:01, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups 08:05 Wed Jul 31

Tallstar (L) ~ Tweaked
Since Mounty took off her reserve for this, I decided to go for it. OA be Mounty, tweaked for tail extension. Comments? Oh, and if it doesn't look right, you can give me a redline, which would be rad c: 04:20, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

It looks like all you did was make the tail tip thicker. Since he was named for his long tail, wouldn't you think it should be longer than this? Perhaps extend it a couple more pixels?

Re-up. Eh 02:32, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

The white tailtip is much too large now. White tips very rarely get very big.

Uh, just to clarify I think she's talking about the actual white, not the lineart? At least that's how I took it. The tail length seems fine, but it's the tip that looks weird... and different from his older image, because why? I think the tail just needed to be extended, but the tip itself was fine, imho.

So, what do I do to the tail tip then? Do I shortened the lineart tailtip, then? ouo 13:09, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I didn't make that clear, yes I was talking about the white, not the lineart. The lineart looks fine, but the white tailtip needs to be much much smaller.

Rock (H) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for fur along the spine. OAs were Flamingo, Shelly, Trolly and Paleh. This guy creeps me out   11:52, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Can you maybe make it so that it's part of the spine, not necessarily just attached to the lineart? eep im horrible at explaining things woops 03:39, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

I know this wasn't mentioned in the nomination, but can you either remove the earpink or make the change in skin color much more subtle? The ear skin might be a slightly different color, but it really shouldn't be very visible on a cat who's all skin. It's bugged me forever. If you keep any color difference between the two places, try and blur it a ton so it's very smooth?

How will I be able to do that, Misty? o.o 19:23, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

Petaldust (W) ~ Redone
Ehhhh, how about it, guys? Fire away, 'cause I'm sure I've goofed up somewhere.

Er, the black looks a tad greenish. 21:52, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

It doesn't appear green to me. o.o

Maybe define the shading on the tail a bit? This is cute, Skye! 02:36, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not sure how picky we are about white patterns, but depending on that the white on the tail might need to be removed. White can't be just along one side of the tail. Pale can, but not white. But other than that, I can't really see any earpink at all. I know it doesn't need to be defined, but I honestly see nothing there. So if it's there, maybe make it stand out just a tad more, and if not, add it.

Re-uploaded. There /was/ ear pink, Paleh. It was just oddly pale and I'd been meaning to change it but didn't get the chance. Also, I shifted the white to the tail tip, so is that better? If not, I can remove it entirely or do something else with it.

Yeah, that's better. Could you define the depth in the eyes a bit?

I'm going to get shot for this, but, as explaned here >> on the second paragraph, tortoiseshell cats are supposed to have very little or no white at all. The amount of white on this image would better describe a calico. If you decide to keep it, that's fine to, but she is described as a tortoiseshell, and I'm just throwing an idea out there. 17:09, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay I fixed the eyes. And I've had this much white on all of my other images, and never gotten asked to change it. o.o I think Robinwing's old image had more.... Turtle Tail's got a fair bit too, but not as much as this one. If I can, I'd really rather keep it. Calicos are primarily white, from pictures I've seen.. I thought tortoiseshell was a description for the placement of the colors. I otp to keep the white as-is, unless I'm asked to change it, since you said it was fine to keep it.

Rosetail (W) ~ Tweaked
OA be me, tweaked for defining the shading. I redid the shading, as it was flat and in some places needed more depth o3o 02:36, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

I'm probably going to get shot to the Dark Forest for this... but I honestly don't think those stripes are very natural, and not much more natural than her previous images. I know realism isn't technically a rule we can /enforce/, but... Just throwing that out there. Also, I think her tail (on all images) should be tinted orange a lot more. It says she has a "pinkish-orange tail", but this looks more pink than pinkish orange, and doesn't appear to have any orange to it at all. I do apologize but this is what I think.

To be honest I was considering to nominate her image set for a redo again - I don't like the images I did came out, and I'd like to try 'em again o3o. 13:09, July 31, 2013 (UTC)