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Snowflake (Ki) ~ For Approval
Best attempt at texture. ^^ 03:06, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to this ==> leg. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading and blur the neck shading a little. 22:45, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste above the <== ear, and blur the shading a bit. 19:52 Thu Jan 22

There's no waste, actually o_O my phone was showing something completely different 22:38 Thu Jan 22

Define the shading, please. i literally can't see any.-- 21:37, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink on the <== ear a little more. 02:48 Sun Jan 25

Re-upped 15:39, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. The back paw tells me it's coming from <== here and the rest ==> there. Also, add more shading to ==> leg. She/he looks good! ^^ ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 01:44, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding some more depth to the shading, especially near the haunch area. 19:39, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit more, please.-- 02:04, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 23:59, January 31, 2015 (UTC)

I spy some waste by that left paw, and the space between the chest fluff and the tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:22, February 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 03:55, February 2, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:32, February 3, 2015 (UTC)

i still feel the neck shading needs more blurring. 13:50, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

I agree^^ and please define the light on the two front legs. 14:04, February 4, 2015 (UTC)

I literally can't blur it anymore  19:46, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

if your going with this lightsource could you expand the light on the chest some?? 16:28, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some depth to the shading, please? 19:56, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 22:40, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

The light source on the tail and back foot conflicts with the body. Think you could move the tail shading to the base of the tail and the shading on the back foot to the top of his foot? And then I'll CBA it, unless someone else has a comment. ^_^ 00:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading on his/her right foot can be blurred a little. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze (Ki) ~ For Approval
itty bitty kitty 21:47 Thu Feb 5

Define shading everywhere. Can't see any. Also, smoothen the stripes. 23:52, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, and Darken the stripes please. 23:54, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think thickening the stripes will do, tbh. Define the texture too. This is lovely :) ~ Burntclaw  Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:15, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't any texture, just how the stripes are smudged. <span style="">00:38 Fri Feb 6

re-upped <span style="">00:43 Fri Feb 6

Regardless of the texture stuff, could you define it? Also, lighten up the shading. Remember, defining isn't always darkening, it's making it more visible. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:06, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Also, thicken the stripes a tad more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:08, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups how do i define the texture if there isn't any? like there literally isn't any texture on the image how do i define what does not exist (sorry if i'm rude it's 6:30 in the morning and i have a cold) <span style="">12:31 Fri Feb 6

I know it's not texture, but could you define the fur thingy (X.X)? While you're at it, can you shrink down her pale chest. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:34, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

boop a doop doop re-uploaded <span style="">12:46 Fri Feb 6

Smudge her pale chest fur into her darker fur some more. She's lookin' gorgeous ^.^ 10:57, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups i know she's so pretty <3 <span style="">14:58 Sat Feb 7

re-ups there was some waste on her nose from the chest <span style="">15:01 Sat Feb 7

Thin out the pale chest a little bit and define the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:42, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have a second opinion on the pale chest? It looks fine to me. i'll probably upload tomorrow, really bummed out because i lost the file of an image i spent a really long time on <span style="">19:17 Sun Feb 8

Yeah, the pale chest could be bigger a bit 16:24, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups also tried to do a version with jayie's shading which can be found here <span style="">23:16 Mon Feb 9

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
OK, I shouldnt be doing black cats on this laptop because the colors are all screwed up and I have to squint to see the shading. But here. 20:01, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her maybe and dull down the Ear Pink. She looks grey on my screen. (correct me if I am wrong about the earpink)  20:14, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a blacked out nose? <span style="">03:09 Tue Feb 10

Actually, I think I asked Breezey about this once, and black cats don't need to have black noses. I think they can have a darker reddish nose, or something along those lines.

Mind darkening him a tad? He seems pretty light. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 10:45, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Brambleshade already said that, Burntclaw^^ Also, may you define the tail shading? 15:55, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Dew Nose 19:46, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over :P 22:13, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Updated 23:12, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice job! 23:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna bring attention to the fact that it's got the wrong file name; could an admin fix that for Bramble? 00:07, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe I could fix it. 00:09, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There we go. I really like her :3 00:11, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mind lightening up the ear pink a little? Gorgeous, Bramble :$ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I think she is one fine kitty <3 Any better? 00:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Coal (NP) (Ro) - For Approval
Yes, I know he needs something done with his fur because of the whole tattered thing. I'll work on that later as I don't have the time right now. Do not comment telling me to add it- I am already fully aware.

his fur isnt tattered jk  but really can you define the shading everywhere but his body. 08:02, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Stone Song (P3) Ancient ~ For Approval
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 06:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look unsmudged/blurred compared to his other images. Mind blurring them/smudging them some? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:15, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded also added foot stripes i forgot 09:54, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Mind define the shading on the back? He's gorgeous!^^  00:16, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Fish Leap (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Gahh, it's been ages since Hawky did charart. <span style="">17:39 Tue Feb 10

Define the light on the tail? he's a pretty kitty <span style="">22:47 Tue Feb 10

Storm Pelt (ki) ~ For Approval
I hate his dad but his mom is nice I guess 19:26, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Would he need a bushy tail or..? 22:28, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think so. He wasn't named for the tail, so as far as I know that just means longhair blank. If we gave lineart tweaks to every cat described with a bushy or plumy tail, like half the cats would have lineart tweaks. 00:03, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Jagged Lightning (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I like his name. Comments? 21:56, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

The sharpclaw isn't smudged as much on the white as this one- mind dulling it down a bit?

Mistystar (Alt D) - For Approval
Yay, my first deputy. And it's of my favorite cat outside of ThunderClan. :D Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:26, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste near her tail and front paws. Also waste between the square thingy where the tail is. Can you brighten up the Earpink? forgot to mention, I don't see much shading, could you define it? (Pretty good for your first deputy!) 22:32, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Conflict in commenting so just want to say really fast that I didn't remove my comment. This is beautiful! =) Would you define mainly the leg and tail shading, I can see the body and neck shading just fine^^, and I think the earpink can be defined, not really so to speak "lightened" as it is already a pretty light color. Lovely job, I must say this is one of your best chararts yet, no lie! 22:37, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

i literally can't see the earpink at all. Darken the shading just a tad, this is really pretty. <span style="">22:43 Tue Feb 10

OMG its so much better than mine XD Would you mind defining the light on the rump, as it looks a liiitttlllle flat. This is gorgeous! <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:10, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Dew Nose (Ki) ~ For Approval
Yay, kits. Is this splotchy enough? 23:59, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I just have this strange feeling the face needs more shading... Correct me if I am wrong   00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)