Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Fleck - Silver Nomination
Ok, I had written most of his history a few weeks ago, and I just added a few quotes to his page. This would be my first real nomination since Milkfur was so minor, so, any suggestions? 02:48, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you elaborate more on when Crookedkit leaves? Nice work. 02:53, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Alright done. I just hope I didn't stray too far away from Fleck himself, and I can always reword it if need be. Thanks =) 02:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Brilliant! I don't mean to hammer you with critiques, but I just noticed that the last quote is not in a dialogue template. Otherwise it's amazing ;) 03:04, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well it is but I wasn't exactly sure how to code it. Do I just need to make it in bold? I'm sorry, I should know how to do this ^^; 03:07, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you're fine ;). All you need to do is add a different template which if you search, "Dialogue a-b" it should give you the correct formatting. List the speaker, then their quote and continue. Then when done, scroll all the way to the bottem and put in your reference, and description. 03:19, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! Done =) 03:32, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you add more to the description of the second quote in the quote section? It doesn't really show his personality unless you tell more about it. 23:13, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done, how's that? 21:31, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand the history more? 02:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, there were only a few more things I could add. Anything else? 03:43, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Could you add more history on when Crookedjaw remembers Fleck (i.e When he hunts mice and he remembers how Fleck taught him how do it)  Owl   X    G    l    itt    er   4LIFE..    The colors of fall 00:29, October 5, 2011 (UTC) I think the end spoiler tag needs to be below the quotes section. 14:52, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I'll try but I don't have my book with me right now, and I'll do the spoiler tag thing now. 01:52, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the first paragraph of Crookedstar's Promise under History? DJCandyBud 08:12, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

For the main quote, can you find something that really brings out his personality? Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:26, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

It's been three weeks without a comment, I think, I could take over if no one else wants too. Punish me if I'm not allowed to say this. DJCandyBud 03:28, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I've been forgetting to work on this, I was planning on doing it when I got home. But if you'd like to help you are welcome to. Gah I feel bad x.x 03:30, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you re-word some of Crookedstar's Promise? 04:53, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I broke up the first paragraph, reworded a few things, but I think his main quote I already have shows his personality, and when you say 'reword it', could you be more specific? And I still need to find the other instances he's mentioned (I'm kind of lazy to look through my copy to find all mentions of him) 16:46, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBV? 23:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Jake ~ Silver Nomination
Comments  Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall  01:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but you'll need to find more quotes. The last quote in the quote section is the same as the main quote, and the second-to-last quote doesn't show his personality. Also add a description to his first quote in the quote section. 22:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thats okay, but when I searched Bluestar's Prophecy harpercollins I could only see sentences when Bluefur was rememering Pinestar joining the kittypets and wondering if he was seeing Jake, and I'm not sure if those show his personality. I added a description for the first quote. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 06:37, October 7, 2011 (UTC) Would you mind adding spaces between the paragraphs in the Bluestar's Prophecy section? Thanks. <font color="orange" style="background:Black">Hollydapple798 Life's no fun without a good scare... 21:02, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Did Bluestar's Prophecy spacing <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 05:38, October 12, 2011 (UTC) I have suggestions for quotes if you still need them. 21:56, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yes please 22:39, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

1."It sounds like hard work, what do you do when it's cold? Don't you freeze?" - Jake to Bluepaw when he is pestering her with questions page 196

2." You don't live around here. Are you one of those forest cats?" Jake to Bluepaw when he starts talking to her. Page 196

You only need 3 quotes and he already has 3 (including the main one) so just pick one of those ;) 23:29, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Sweetflower, that helped a lot. I already had the second quote you suggested there, so I just added the first one. 23:19, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Could you find a reference for the first trivia? 17:34, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome Owl. I'm always happy to help, I could help you with that first reference too. 18:19, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks but no thanks. I already added it in. 05:39, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another reference in the first listed trivia? DJCandyBud 08:16, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Added another reference 05:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make Bluestar's Prophecy a bit more? There are a lot of periods when they could be commas. (Hope that made sense xD)  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:30, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

If you ment to expand it word wise and add commas, I did that. If you didn't mean that, could you explain some more? ;) 01:49, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a reference for the intro when it states he is plump? If it can't be proved, then delete it. DJCandyBud 03:32, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sometimes it's in the reference already given which I believe it is. Descriptions don't need to have multiple references if it can be included in one. 03:38, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well. CBV? 00:18, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanfur~Silver nomination
Excuse me. I may be somehow doing this wrong. xD I'm nominating him because his page isn't a stub and it seems all the info that can be added on him is added. I cna't find any good quotes for him, but his main quote looks good. . 01:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Bahaha your not doing it wrong ;) Can you expand SkyClan's Destiny at all?   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 22:58, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see if i can. :) . 22:59, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 23:09, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I've fixed some sentences and at elast attemped to expand, but there isn't much to expand, he doesn't appear very often. :3 . 23:10, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

That's better ;)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 23:42, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you find one or two more quotes? 19:28, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I looked through the pages where he talk and appears, but nothing is good enough for a quote. Unless, "Of course." Is a good quote. O.o. 22:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the quotes don't have to be spoken by him. They can always be from a narrator or a dialogue quote. The transitions between paragraphs, like "He is not seen for a while" or "he first appears". Could you possibly rephrase those sentences so you don't include those words? If not, it's fine. Nice work! 00:40, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Other than that it looks a lot better than when you started! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 23:03, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks guys! And I've fixed everything you stated, Atelda. . 23:36, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome, I think there's basically nothing wrong with it. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 23:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

You should fix this sentence: "He comes back to camp with eight other warriors, he is injured shredded ears."

Can you re-word the second paragraph of SkyClan's Destiny? 04:57, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardfoot ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? Dew st  ar  Don't judge me!   23:07, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Crookedstar's Promise.   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 23:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could you also expand Code of the Clans? 18:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok guys. How do i do that?? Sorry! Dew st  ar  Don't judge me!   21:35, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

You either add more detail or more history. Also, could you possibly find a better main quote? Awesome. 21:45, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

No, you switch out the main quote for something else. Preferably a quote that shows her personality. 22:02, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Basically what Atelda said. ;)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 22:12, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well i don`t have Bluestar`s prophecy and Crookedstar`s promise and i don`t no if Leopardfoot is even in Code of the clans -_- Im trying my best but still i no that Leopardfoot has Pinestar`s kits but i don`t no what Leopardfoot is like nothing explains it???????? And i dont no what expand means like do i take parts from the book? -_-  Dew  st  ar  Don't judge me!   22:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, ok, let's slow down. First, it doesn't matter if you have neither of the books, that's what Harper Collins Browse Inside is for ;). Second, If she is mentioned in Code of the Clans, it would be mentioned in her article. Third, If you want to know what she is like, just read her article, most of the time, the stuff in an article, shows her personality, by her actions and words. Fourth, Expand means to make it bigger, so basically, it's detailing it ;) Fifth, you can take parts from the book, and add it too her article if it's nessicary. You try to avoid taking direct quotes, meaning typing word for word of what she says. I hope this helped. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 22:54, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

So do i go into her articale and detail it more??/ i dont get it cuz im getting frustrated  Dew  st  ar  Don't judge me!   14:24, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but first you need what she is saying in front of you. Than you take the information from it and detail it. Please don't get frusterated, it get's easier, but only if you let it. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 20:04, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest you check out the guidelines. 22:28, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Dew, is this still being worked on? It's been over a week. 15:59, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over this nomination if you want. 20:52, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Separate the first two paragraphs of Bluestar's Prophecy if possible. 05:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok done. I expanded CP and COTC. added a new main quote. And seperated the first two paragraphs. That took a while. Comments? 11:35, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 00:18, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Sweetflower. Unfortunately this article has already been voted on and granted silver status, but it was not updated on the talk page. 01:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok, I'll fix up a diferent article xD. 11:17, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Molepaw ~Silver Nomination
Anybody know some places he appears? I looked int he books he was in, but I dont know the page numbers, so I cant look into great detail at the moment. Also, if I knew there might be a chance I can add a quote or two. Other than that, his page looks good. . 00:10, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you really elaborate on when it's said "he makes minor appearences"? Or possibly add more detail and rephrase the sentence to avoid those phrases^. Awesome so far! 00:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add a few quotes (including a main one). 21:30, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Arg. *Facepalm* :3 Did you read my paragrpah up there? I quote: "I dont know the page numbers, so I cant look into great detail at the moment. Also, if I knew there might be a chance I can add a quote or two." I don't know so i can't at the moment. . 22:27, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, maybe you can detail it with words, instead of stuff used exactly in the book. Like changing the words around, thus expanding the sentence. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 22:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I tried doing that once or twice, but users kept reverting it. . 22:48, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, well it was worth a try. Maybe they think it was unnessicary, which means you might as well wait to get the book(s) before you expand or detail it. So that your not wasting your time adding and undoing what they are doing. Thanks, for trying! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 22:58, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I have the books, I have the whole series, in fact. -- I just don't know the pages where Molekit/paw is exacily mentioned. :3 . 23:17, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, silly me :3. Maybe you could skim through the book? S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 23:27, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I've already tried that, but if he appears minorly, I doubt i'd be able to spot it. :S. 23:35, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, true, we'll maybe when your not busy, you could re-read the whole book :P So you can find it :)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 23:41, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Is it absoulutly nessecary? O.o I'm already reading about six books. xD. 05:45, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, it's not, but I just thought if you had free time on your hands you could ;)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 17:49, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken out Fading Echoes some, possibly add in more details to the minor appearance. 04:14, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is the style template ment to be there when you're nominating it? DJCandyBud 08:37, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

In the Fading Echoes section, it says, "...about what they argued about." Take out the first "about", and maybe un-italicize the "what". <font color="orange" style="background:Black">Hollydapple798 Happy Halloween! 15:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The style template is only a guideline telling the reader or such that this article needs work. Once voted and if made silver, then I'll delete it. 15:55, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, just confused. DJCandyBud 03:39, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Fuzzypelt ~ Silver Nomination
Fuzzypelt's page is pretty good. Comments? 13:28, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! But the last paragraph in BP could use a little more deatail if possible. :) . 13:31, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Just if you can expand all of BP than your good. Other than that, it looks good! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 23:06, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I just expanded his history and put it in detail. How's this? 11:50, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Could you take out and refrase this direct quote: "We'll defend the camp with our lives, if necessary" Thanks,   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 21:32, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Expand BP more. It still looks as if it could be expanded a lot. And I think the main quote should be switched with this quote: "From now on you'll be called Patchpaw, and I give you Fuzzypelt as your mentor. Listen to him carefully because, though he is young, he is clever enough to teach you how to use your courage wisely." 11:01, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I like your suggestion Rainwillow. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 20:00, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

The bottem quote should be changed because it does not describe him as well as another quote you could probably find. Also, as I was looking in the references, there are several references that do not specify which book. I suggest you correct those references too. ;) 22:28, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add another reference for the introduction? DJCandyBud 08:40, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I changed the quote. 02:36, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you take out the direct quote: "We'll defend the camp with our lives, if necessary" and re-word it so it isn't a direct quote? 15:57, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Did it ever say why he had to move into the elders den early? If so, add that in. ^-^  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:07, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

It never said anything. 23:58, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? (The quote in context was rephrased) 00:22, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lapping Wave ~ Silver Nomination
THIS one isn't being voted for or nominated, and it's bronze. And no, I didn't go over my three nomination limit, becuase Oatwhisker was already silver statused. :3 . 03:37, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

If not can you try to expand ''Sign of the Moon. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters!'' 19:57, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty nice so far! Maybe break up the SoTM section up into two paragraphs, after, "He begins to wail along with the rest of his siblings because she runs out of milk and they are still hungry." <font color="orange" style="background:Black">Hollydapple798 Happy Halloween! 15:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a typo if you don't mind. DJCandyBud 03:44, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Of course I don't mind! :D Just ebcuase I'm nominating it, doesn't mean you can't edit it. :) . 01:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Shiningheart ~ Silver Nomination
I feel the need to fix up all three of these articles, as they're for three wonderful people. Comments? 04:28, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I rewrote both sections in her history, and expanded as much as I could. 05:42, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Same as below, her page looks awesome. :P 10:55, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with this article, you rewrote it very well! 21:44, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't her article include a family tree? 22:28, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I found the template so I just added it in. ;) 23:22, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Excellent. I can see nothing wrong except that "Both her and Braveheart are shown to be very proud of their daughter, despite the troubles that each cat faces, including Jaypaw." should be "Both she and Braveheart are shown to be very proud of their daughter, despite the troubles that each cat faces, including Jaypaw."

Fixed. 01:45, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 00:23, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Braveheart ~ Silver Nomination
Same as Brightspirit and Shiningheart. Comments? 04:29, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I rewrote both sections in his history, and expanded as much as I could. 05:43, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

The page looks awesome. It looks better than before. :D 10:53, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Again, I see nothing wrong with his article, good rewriting :) 21:47, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't his article include a family tree even if it's small? 22:28, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think it should, if he has family that we know of, it's still a family, therefor he should have a tree. 23:23, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I found the template, so I just added it in. :P 23:22, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, "Him and his family are treated with great respect and honor among the ranks of StarClan, and are welcomed warmly by Whitestorm and Bluestar." should be "He and his family are treated with great respect and honor among the ranks of StarClan, and are welcomed warmly by Whitestorm and Bluestar." Also, for the third quote's caption, "then" should be "than", because you're introducing the second element in comparison and you're not saying something is after another.

Fixed. >.>;;; 01:48, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

My apologies if my lengthy explanations sound arrogant. If you'd like, I can try to keep them shorter next time. I can't see anything else wrong with this.

You can always fix it for yourself. Also, it's just something Cloudeh does. Anyways CBV? 00:24, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Prickleface ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 19:30, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes that can be added? Remember, they don't just have to be someone speaking, if they show personality. 19:34, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 20:22, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any more quotes that you could use? 21:50, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Probably, I'll search the book for some. 22:06, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, if you need any suggestions I'll try to find some. 23:36, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I added one quote, I couldn't find any others. 14:33, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

One more is better than no more. 14:51, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I reread the whole book, and I couldn't find any quotes. 12:28, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

You should change the sentence "After all the medicine cats dream the same message, and they come to a decision about what must be done." to either "After all the medicine cats dream the same message, they come to a decision about what must be done.", omitting the "and", or also as "All the medicine cats dream the same message, and they come to a decision about what must be done."

Done. Sorry for the delay! 18:15, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail ~ Silver Nomination
I've been working on this for a while I guess. Comments? 23:27, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you re-write these direct quotes because your supposed to avoid direct quotes: "brave Rosetail, and that their kits were safe thanks to Yellowfang." (In the Into The Wild section) and "Poppydawn! No! Don't leave me!" (In Cats of the Clan section) 23:34, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Expand BP please. 02:15, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Done, I also realised I forgot the main quote, so I added that in. 03:51, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, it looks great! :D 03:55, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks XD! 07:41, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Secrets of the Clans please. 18:16, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded Secrets of the Clans. 05:44, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Put what codes she was mentioned in, it doesn't say in the Code of the Clans section. 17:21, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the Code of the Clans section flow a bit more? Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:01, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Could Bluestar's Prophecy be elaborated a little bit? I see quite a few one sentence/two sentence paragraphs. If not, I understand - it's not possible. xD 17:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Done, and Cloudy, I understand where you're coming from. I tried to make sure every paragraph had at least three sentences in them, but if something doesn't make sence, just point it out. ;) 02:51, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Greenflower ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded her history and added all of the quotes relevant to her. Comments? 10:04, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a few mistakes. Looks great though! 11:26, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I added a couple links. Other then that minor issue, this looks excellent for such a minor character. Job well done, Speckle. 15:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Should the "c" in "half-clan" be capitalized in the second paragraph? Otherwise, looks nice!

Done 16:08, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Pip ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded the history and added in the history for the allegiance-only books. 22:45, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Is the information on him barking at cats and chasing them necessary to put in the introduction? DJCandyBud 08:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any narrator quotes you could use? 13:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Instead of saying, "There have also been mentions of a dog chasing cats in the other books, which most likely was him," in the Dark River section, do you think you could make a trivia section, and add that in there? That way the Dark River section would be more relevant to his appearance in DR. <font color="orange" style="background:Black">Hollydapple798 Happy Halloween! 15:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the trivia thing, but narrator quotes about him don't really describe his personality... 16:21, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded the history a lot. Comments? 22:57, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand CP if you can please. 00:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I already did...I don't have the book right now. 00:30, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have a better quote for a main quote? 04:08, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, but I'll try to find one. 16:27, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think his quote should be from when he leaves ThunderClan. Not necessarily the one on his page now, but I think he says some pretty quote worthy things there. I can find another if you need help. =) 17:13, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Good idea. Can you? :3 17:26, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Better? I also added the quote from Lionpaw, because I really feel that describes Pinestar well. 17:41, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! You seem to have every single book in the series. :3 23:59, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I do, actually. I just don't care for some of the "manga"... The only four I don't have are the Tigerstar and Sasha trilogy and The Rise of Scourge. =P 16:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Onestar - Silver Nomination
Only certain parts of the history needed to be expanded. Since it was the content drive, I fixed what was needed. DON'T tell me to expand Dawn, because I will hurt you. Comments? 23:39, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

His page is really good, expand Fire and Ice a bit. 15:42, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Outcast too please! 16:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

If possible could you expand Long Shadows and Sunset? 21:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I couldn't really expand POT, but I was able to expand Fire and Ice. 21:45, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a way you could expand Fading Echoes? Maybe he said something important when he was "unconvinced." But I'm not sure. 04:06, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the Cats of the Clans section? 17:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

The "c" in "a clan" in the second quote under the Quotes section should be capitalized, I think.

Clan isn't capitalized all of the time, believe it or not. Not sure why, but it happens quite a lot... 16:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's just a frequently-made typo. I know I forget to capitalize "Clan" a lot when I write fan fiction. Anyway, in the Firestar's Quest section, could you change the hyphen to a comma, and instead of saying "his territory" change it to "WindClan's territory"? 02:41, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail ~ Silver Nomination
Yes, in fact, I am still alive. Sorry for my sudden absense, but I still have a lot school work and I'm on the PCA to. But here I am! I edited her page a bit more, to make it flow and fixed some errors. What do you think? Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Which Swallowtail are you nominating? The one of WindClan, or the one of RiverClan? The link goes to the disambiguation page page. XD 17:06, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Argh, stupid me. xD One from WindClan, Antpelts mate. xD Changed the link. Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  18:45, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you extend Sign of the Moon any? Same with Dark River. 18:50, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Try changing this sentence: "Dovewing mentions remembers seeing her at the Gathering with Antpelt, and assumes that they had been mates." The "mentions remembers" part is the place where it doesn't seem to make sense.

Can you expand The Sight to make it sound like "Swallowkit is born to Gorsetail along with her two siblings, Thistlekit and Sedgekit in WindClan.", or something along those lines. DJCandyBud 03:16, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded Dark River and The Sight, working on Sign of the Moon right now. Also fixed the sentence. Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  22:49, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Couldn't really extend Sign of the Moon, since I think that was the only time she was mentioned, but I added a bit. Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  20:09, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyflower ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? :3 20:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add another quote and add more details to SotM 23:51, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add another quote after school, don't feel like digging through my books. And she's not mentioned in SotM? 11:14, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Done, anything else? 21:33, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you expand CP (particularly the first paragraph)? 11:58, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 01:10, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think she's ready, it's all good. :3 --<font face="Papyrus">CloudtailxBrightheart 09:34, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to add more to the first paragraph in Crookedstar's Promise? 08:58, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, I don't think anymore could be added to that, it's a simple thing, really... --<font face="Papyrus">CloudtailxBrightheart 09:34, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Cloud (If I can call you that). I actually can't expand the first sentence. Her appearance vaugly. 11:52, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rose ~ Silver Nomination
I think she's ready. Comments? 14:51, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

In Firestar's Quest, it doesn't really explain why/how they came upon Rose/Lily. Could you maybe add a sentence or two explaining that they were looking for cats to join SkyClan? The beginning sentence doesn't tell much. Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  21:48, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 11:57, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good so far. Maybe simplify the wording in FQ section? At least change the part where it says "...he had never seen before a cat with such coloration...." 02:36, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. 11:53, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

CloudtailxBrightheart Join Request
'Hi! Could I join Project Characters please? I've read all of the Warriors Books except Crookedstar's Promise ( Because I just hate him... Really... *Shuffles feet nervously* ) xxx P.S: How do I make those signatures like you guys have?' --<font face="Papyrus">CloudtailxBrightheart 09:33, November 8, 2011 (UTC)--<font face="Papyrus">CloudtailxBrightheart 09:33, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in momentarily, please read the FAQ and welcome to the project. As for the signatures, you can ask a user to make one for you or you can go here. And it's okay if you haven't read all the books. 18:18, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all of the history. Comments? 00:02, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I forgot the quotes. I'm adding them in now. 00:03, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the first paragraph of Dark River if possible? 05:15, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've changes a few typos in Dark River and Long Shadows if anyone hadn't noticed them. xxx --<font face="Papyrus">CloudtailxBrightheart 09:40, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Flowerstar ~ Silver Nomination
I took out the eye color because I re-read the story and it never said she had green eyes. Comments? 11:21, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Soot ~ Silver Nomination
Adding a quote section now. Comments? 01:48, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Could you possibly add detail to the second to last sentence/paragraph in CP? 11:52, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Flora ~ Silver Nomination
Quotes are added, article's been expanded a bit, so comments? 02:30, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lily ~ Silver Nomination
Her sister was nominated, and I think she's ready too! Comments? 12:12, November 10, 2011 (UTC)