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Chasing Clouds - For Approval
I will say that Moonpelt's version was very good, and I'll remember to put the rank after my charart next time. I guess I didn't think I needed it since Chasing Clouds has only one known rank. Anyways, comments?--Shaf Girl  23:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh...blur the shading on his gray parts and darken the shading on the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:46, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good....blur the gray. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred some line art on the ear. Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 13:51, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add some grey to the face. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:39, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart's blurred in several places. Raven flight 92 00:21, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more gray patches all over-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:27, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading on the gray parts, darken the white shading, fixed the blurred lineart on the ear and some other places, and added gray to the face and other parts.--Shaf Girl  02:14, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks weird. Quailflight 09:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's blurred a lot. Raven flight 92 23:00, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where exactly do you see it blurred? Maybe it's obvious to you, but I can't tell. My computer crashed a few days ago and I have limited time on my brother's computer, so I can't really look over to see exactly where it's blurred.--Shaf Girl  23:52, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Around the head and tail, I think. Raven flight 92 00:29, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to working on it soon.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:27, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If there are still blurred places, I can fix that. Also, any other problems?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:19, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * The lineart still looks blurred...maybe its this computer as its not my own. Its like fuzzy where it touches the color and it seems almost blurred to the gray patches. Blur the patches more too.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I went over all the fuzzy places and fixed them. Also blurred the patches into the white part a little more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * The white patches on the tail are very grey and the shading needs thickening and blending all over. ✐Sa  NdY  16:09, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:20, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * The shading on his gray patch on his back needs to be blurred more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:39, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:32, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:41, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add more grey to the back paws and make his ear more noticeable. FrostHeart 02:49, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you mean by "more noticeable." I can't change the lineart.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:21, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Frostheart meant earpink, which I agree could be a bit bigger. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:57, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  19:19, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bram ble  15:57, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry; but the shading looks very bumpy. Try blurring it more, (especially on th front leg closest to us) and it seems as if blurred lineart is causing the shading to look bumpy, perhaps smooth it out if it is Night  Fall 08:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:51, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think his eyes are a little dark; maybe you should lighten them up a little. But otherwise, I think he looks great! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 15:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a little more, so it shows up better. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 13:57, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  22:21, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 23:18, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be more coral like. The line-art is blurred in the circled parts. Frostheart♥ 02:08, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W)-For Approval
Well, this is my first charart, and I think it came out pretty well. Any comments? River pelt  23:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

That is REALLY GOOD! Try to make his bottom jaw look... strange. Almost like broken, okay? That's how it's supposed to be! But seriously, it looks nice. Shadowstream 11:22, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made the jaw look as crooked as i could. Riverpelt 18:04, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The line art is really blurred. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:54, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The jaw needs to look like this. And the lineart is really blurred. -- 雨 晶須  22:18, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! '''Reuploaded. '''How's that, or do I need to sharpen the line art a bit more? River pelt  22:29, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes you should. And try expanding the beige on his nect more, and also add sharper edges to the tabby stripes.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  02:24, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

That is awesome! Jut sharpen the tabby a little like Mousetalon said. And try to make his fur an almost red color, like the leader charart. Shadowstream 12:07, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I tried to sharpen the line art more, fixed the beige on his neck, sharpened the tabby markings, and made his fur a red color. Hold on I have to blur the tabby marks more.'''Reuploaded. '''How's this? River pelt  12:54, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

....The whole image looks blurred likes he's just super FUZZY.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:58, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry! I'll redo it completely! River pelt  23:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid the entire charart! Is this any better? River pelt  00:10, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

The pink still isn't hitting it....and you have bits and pieces of gray surrounding the image. They possibly came from editing the image and unable to see it as the image is transparent. I uploaded an image to show, but this image isn't transparent so don't try editing it. Just use it as a reference. I also included the ear pink from his deputy image.
 * Much better...now lets begin. The ear pink needs to lighter as its too dark/bright and it doesn't match his deputy image one as you can see above. He's also missing a patch of tan fur on his front forepaw. The tabby stripes need to be blurred tremindously.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:00, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks Shimmerpool! Reuploaded. Oops I need to blur the stripes a bit more. Reuploaded. How's this? River  pelt  11:49, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded. I cleared out the gray spots and made the ear pink the same color as the deputy's ear pink. River pelt  23:07, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, fix the line art on the muzzle, blur the stripes more and lengthen the cream coloured throat-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:51, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... '''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the line art, blurred the stripes, and lengthened the cream-colored throat. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:37, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks as if half his nose was cut off  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the stripes in more. You see how they're supper smoothed in almost like fadded into hsi fur on the deputy image? Also I think some highlights would be nice. Just add them to the same place as his deputy image. :)--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:53, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded.  Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:44, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the nose. Anything else? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 18:18, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the pelt a little bit. It seems a bit light. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:19, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It's a bit darker now. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 23:48, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The nose still doesn't look quite right; the lineart is gray at the tip  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:14, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the nose a bit, and cleared away the gray lineart. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:15, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

The muzzle line art looks cut off-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:37, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

What do u mean about the line art being cut off? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 13:43, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think she means that it looks flat. It's more rounded in his other images. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:10, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The beige stripe on his throat is a little to thick at the bottom. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching... 13:23, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Any more comments? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 22:08, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reshape his ear and highlight the tail.

The ear pink looks fine to me, but Frostheart is right about highlighting the tail. Frostheart, always remember to sign after you leave a comment  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:15, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is highlighted, its just a bit dull. Do u mean brighten the highlight on the tail? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:43, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I brightened the highlights on the tail, if that's what you wanted me to do. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:10, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Any more comments? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:56, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the muzzle line art more. Some of the line art looks blurred. Blur the ear pink. Make the stripes a little sharper-- Night s h i n e   R  03:02, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How's this? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 13:02, May 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * The highlights look like you've overdone them; too bright and not blurred. The ear pink needs to be more triangular, slightly more reddish and blurred and the stripes/differently coloured fur needs blending also. -- Sandy star 18:31, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Uh, I'm almost ready to withdraw him, but not yet! Is this any better? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 17:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Don't give up River. It's getting there. Remaking tabbies has to be the hardest thing in charart. Lighten the stripes some. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:59, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Ashshadow, and yes tabbies are hard, but I lightened his stripes. Any more comments? And could somebody give me a few pointers about tabbies. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)


 * The ear pink could be blurred just a tad more and there's something about the stripes thats bothering me..lighten them so more I believe. I know how you feel, Squirrelflight was my first image and we all know she's a tabby. So many moons ago that has been and I learned alot from just looking at others styles. But remember tabbies have so many different patterns so if you're doing one who doesn't have an image let your imagination soar, but since he must live up to his previous image its best to lay the images side by side on your desktop and work with your image and compare it to the other. My best advice is after you done practice with making your own charries but you don't have to upload them, just compare them to someone elses image and ask yourself: Is the ear too dark? Are the stripes blurred in enough? Did I smudge the lineart? Eventually it'll come very easy to you :)--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:32, May 31, 2010 (UTC)


 * Also possibly try the fade out with your blurring as the taill seems too crowded and dark--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 02:22, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks Shimmerpool for the advice! =) So how's this? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 22:19, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Layer on another line art. The colours don't look correct. Thicken the muzzle line art more-- Night s h i n e   R  06:08, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay guys, I'm gonna redo this completely, because I think I know what I did wrong, okay? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I just got GIMP but it's not letting me color, it's keeping the color black! can someone help me? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:01, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

I figured it out! sorry! Since I have GIMP now, does it look any better? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 22:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are perfect now, but he's too dark and so is the ear pink. You need to blur in the higlights as well. You almost missed the tan part on his leg again. After fixing the shading you might have to blur in the stripes again.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 00:45, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights still need to be blurred more and add some shading to the top of his head. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:02, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I blurred in the highlights more, and added some shading to his head. Anything else? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:38, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Bramble told me somethings I should fix and I think I fixed them. So how does he look now? River pelt Heart of Amber 18:06, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the lineart on the head for you; that can be highly tricky to fix. I also renamed it for you; you should reupload each time on the file name: Crookedstar.warrior.png. That's the proper name. I can't see anything right at the moment. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 19:58, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

As bramble said there are a few things wrong with this and there is a lot of differences compared to his deputy his pely colour need to be almost brown-ish pink like his Deputy image as his current pelt colour looks brown-ish red. :)Wildear~101:) 21:27, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Do you see _______> Notice how his pelt colour has brighter highlights try to base it off of this hope this helps! :)Wildear~101:) 21:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

'''ReUploaded. '''Okay Redid the whole thing again, and I think it looks kinda like the deputy image. Comments? River pelt Heart of Amber 01:10, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is way better! Though, the lineart arount the eye looks kindda strange.. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  23:11, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. I didn't change it. River pelt Heart of Amber 00:15, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it looks smudged. Fill in the black pixels again. Take the muzzle line art from his deputy image and put it on this-- Night s h i n e   R  00:42, June 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * You're really getting somewhere with this, well done =) The ear pink needs to be a little darker reddish-pink though I think and the bit of shading on his midriff needs blending. -- Sandy star 13:24, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Okay I fixed it! Anything else? River pelt Heart of Amber 13:57, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:19, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the earpink. River pelt Heart of Amber 18:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! But you'll notice that the deputy's image has a lighter ear pink. I suggest lighting the ear pink a bit. :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 23:08, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Okay I made the ear pink the same color as the deputy image. Better? River pelt Heart of Amber 23:22, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Dark hallows 04:53, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I feel like it could be jaw could be fixed more. Quailflight 11:09, June 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * I disagree; his jaw is the same as on his deputy image. -- Sandy star 11:14, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think the jaw matches the deputy image well. River pelt Heart of Amber 13:20, June 13, 2010 (UTC).

Some of the lineart is blurred and gray on the muzzle though. Kaoru  Hitachiin  13:35, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''lineart fixed! River pelt Heart of Amber 15:08, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Wow hes looking beautiful! Wildear~101 15:14, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) -- For Approval
This probably isn't my best charar ever, but anyway, comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  22:51, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good. ^-^ I'd say to darken the shading and lighten the highlights because I can't really see them, but this is trully fabulous. ;)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 21:44, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading and lightened highlights, better?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:23, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. :)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 23:18, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the bit of shading on the tail tip and also blur the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:49, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ear pink and tail tip shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:30, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:33, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading overlaps the highlights, but it needs to be a smooth connection. Try blurring the transition some. 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 19:00, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the places where the brown touches the white.

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long, comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:27, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition on the fore arm-- Night s h i n e   R  03:07, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred fore arm transition. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  12:29, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think there's some blurred lineart at the very end of the transition between brown and white on our right end of the tail. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 14:28, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I couldn't find it (if I was looking at the right section...)-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  01:10, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white parts some more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:51, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

On the transition between brown and white on the tail, on this >> side of it it looks like there's a jagged strand of lineart, and I think some of it got blurred while blurring the transition. Does this help you find it? $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 14:38, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, I just now realized that the lineart wasn't blurred, but that it was part of the tail lineart. For some reason it looked different to me, but I have no clue why. That's completely my fail, and I apologize greatly for it. D: (When I'm done making this comment I'll find a book and hit myself in the head repeatedly.) Otherwise for the image, lighten the shading just a little bit. It looks like it's overlapping the highlights when it should look like a smooth transition. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 03:23, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Really nice! I'd say to blur the front right(furthest away) leg where the two colours meet. It might already be blurred... Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  16:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading is too light, isn't it? Icethroat- It's ok, it looked a little odd, so I fixed it. -- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blue: Blur some more. Red: Blurred lnieart. Hope this helps! :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  14:30, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred and fixed as directed above. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  15:01, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) For Approval
fail,fail,such a fail.The sun is the left corner not the right.That's why the shading is on the bottom. S n i c k e r s 11 Days! 23:35, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to resave the blank. Here:



Also, look at a turtorial for the eyes. And I can't see much shading.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:54, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I resized it:

It's going to need to be blurred a lot more to look like her other images and shading. Dark hallows 01:44, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blurring tool is very bad,but I'll try. S n i c k e r s  8 Days! 21:09, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

CoughUseGIMPcoughcough ;) The blurring tool is at least twice as strong as pixlr's. insane  brick'd 21:39, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thats's why I don't use Pixlr... GIMP is so much better (I also have photoshop, but never use it...) Dark hallows 23:12, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to get on any art program for a couple days....Dunno why.Give me ummm 4 days. S n i c k e r s  7 Days! 18:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more. And the line art is messed up at the eye area. FrostHeart 03:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said, I'll try to blur it more. S n i c k e r s   7 Days! 19:45, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  S n i c k e r s   3 Days! Whoohoo! 19:46, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr is fine and is in my opinion better the GIMP once you know how to use it properly. I'll make a tutorial in a day or so showing you how. xD For the image: Blur the hgihlights some more. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:06, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Will do. $ Coolstar  $  19:50, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Needs to be blurred and smudged some more to look like her elder and warrior image, try going for a smoother effect :) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 00:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Rrrr. Pixlr froze when I opened it.Not again. =( I'll keep trying to get it to work. ~ Blue Lightning Strikes! I'm so shocked  11:42, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Snickers Oh the simpleness of simple stuff  13:10, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye line art and I think this will be ready. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:09, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where...Oh never mind, I see.Will do. Snickers Oh the simpleness of simple stuff  21:16, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded<span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">Gol den <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">thorn Epic! 11:51, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful! --  Sky dragon Ride the wind 23:31, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! *blushes* Snickers

Comments? <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">Gol den <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">thorn Epic! 14:07, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome! Just add some more highlights! :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 05:01, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I have highlights.... Snickers!

The highlights look fine to me but the eye still bothers me. I think it's the way you colored it. It looks too big. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W) For Approval
So here he is. He's my first one, so I know he's not that great, but what do you think? Let me know if this is under the limit; I think it is, but I'm not sure. Skydragon 18:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow this is really good perhaps where you put the stripe below his ear you should've put another stripe as on his leader image he has two grey stripes either side. Hope that helps :D :)Wildear~101:) 18:32, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but the file needs to be named Gorsestar.warrior.png. Jpg files dont have the best quality and look pixilated. Besides that darken the shading a bit. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice :) Thicken the stripes a bit, in addition to what Wildear and Ashshadow have said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is this better? Skydragon 21:30, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It still looked funny to me, so I fixed it again. Skydragon 18:24, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few more stripes on his haunch and tail and thicken them a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  01:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I don't think he has any more stripes on his tail in his leader image. Is this better though? Skydragon Ride the wind.... 02:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Move the tail stripes up more. Lengthen the stripes on his haunch a bit more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:32, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Lengthened the stripes and moved the ones on his tail. Skydragon Ride the wind.... 17:52, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more and this should be ready-- Night s h i n e   R  06:33, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the shading. Skydragon Listen...the wind is singing... 14:53, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice, Skydragon! There's just one thing that's bugging me; on the first tabby stripe going down the back, there's a pixel that sits in between the Y fold. Does that make any sense to you? Holly dapple  01:54, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

It bugged me too, but I looked at the leader image and it was in the leader image, so... -- <span style="color:#09FF63;Font-family:Vivaldi;Background:#67C5CF;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.15em; color:#379502">Snickers

Oh, okay, then. Sorry. If anything, brighten the highlights on the face. If you don't use highlights (I don't think they're neccesary), then don't bother, but it looks like you do, so maybe try that. Holly dapple  03:22, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added a highlight to the face.  Sky dra gon    Follow the wind...  14:46, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be my moniter but I can barely see the shading. Can you darken it more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:16, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''darkened shading.  Sky dragon Ride the wind 18:35, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try changing the color of the ear pink to a more darker color, like on Ashfoot. This looks really nice! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 14:02, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is that better? It's not darker, but it's closer to Ashfoot's.  Sky dragon Ride the wind 14:50, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I think that looks much better....can't really see anything else. Good job! =D -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 19:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 23:15, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

No, it matches the leader image. I think it looks fine.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  23:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I'm gonna be gone until about the 20th of this month, and I won't be able to work on him. Please don't delete him. Thanx!-- Whisper on the wind   Skydragon  03:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know...I think it needs more stripes. <font color="Turqoise">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 03:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight (W)-For Approval


This is my last Charat before I leave PCA. I think it has changed for the worst and I think to truely fullfill that promise I made back when PCA 'closed', I must work hard at Project Characters. To be a good user ti is not about PCA, as most users think. So I will be leaving after this. Sorry to Bramble, but I don't think PCA is as good as it was when I first joined. :( Hope you like Briarlight, I tried to make her my best ever. Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:55, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is good Fawny :) maybe just blur the ear pink and little more. Shruggy talk 16:03, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  16:10, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Though, her pelt is a bit to light, darken it a bit, and blur the ear pink. :) Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 17:32, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Beautifu work, Fawnstorm! The lineart looks great. The only thing that bothers me is the lineart on the front leg facing us, where it goes up into the body seems a tad long. Does that make any sense...? Other than that, it looks ''brilliant. ''We'll miss seeing your work, Fawnstorm! Holly dapple  18:12, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

We had the line art approved before she used it, so it should be fine.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:29, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. Now that I'm looking at it again a little more technically, it looks fine. Holly dapple  05:09, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thnaks guys. Made it darker. xD Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:10, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. I can barely see any-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:25, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - I can see the shading fine myself - maybe it's just your computer Night. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:54, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm. Does anyone else not see much shading?-- Night s h i n e   R  18:00, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the shading fine; just darken it on the front leg farthest from us, the back leg farthest from us, and the tail Night  Fall 21:10, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Weird, I hardly see any. But I can see shading fine on other chararts.-- Night s h i n e   R  21:14, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

So am I darkening the shading or not? I'm confuzzled. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:03, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Just a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  05:26, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

The shading? Sorry, Night(s), I'm really confused... Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:10, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the shading-- Night s h i n e   R  06:33, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've done that, but not much because it's blurred into the highlights. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:53, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Just lighten the highlights. Also this should be on your current projects list. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:09, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened highlights. I'm going to stay with PCA, but due to my nature I'd rather not say why. Only Bramble knows, and it was hard enough to tell her why I was staying. xD You guys are stuck with me for a little longer. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:41, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Move the ear pink up a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  16:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Bird That Rides the Wind (Ro)- For Approval


This is the 35th I think. If it isnt, than decline it. But anyways this IS my first charart! i feel proud of it! Is there anything I need to improve?Rubyblaze 22:34, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Blur the mud streaks. Darken the ear pink and nose colour. The line art looks a little blurred-- Night s h i n e   R  22:48, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Smudged the mud streaksRubyblaze 22:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to fix the line art and darken the nose colour and ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  23:01, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- darkened the ear and nose color.Rubyblaze 23:14, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like a jpeg. Convert into png and name it BirdThatRidestheWind.rogue -- Quailflight 23:16, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It actually is png right now. It just looks pixelated for some reason. Fix the line art and make the mud streaks a little more blurred-- Night s h i n e   R  23:23, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay. I am having trouble with the line art with I fixed the mud streaks.Rubyblaze 23:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can help. Can you please stop putting the image into a thumbnail?-- Night s h i n e   R  00:04, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed line art-- Night s h i n e   R  00:48, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. Sorry. I thought that was the way you were suppose to do. *turns pink* Is there anything else I need to do?Rubyblaze 01:04, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes so they are more visible-- Night s h i n e   R  01:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better?Rubyblaze 23:52, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Now just blur the stripes, and I think she'll look good. =) Nice job on the shading, by the way! -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 14:04, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (W) For Approval
I couldn't edit the Reservations Table... Could someone do that for me? Thanks. Comments? --<font color="#009900">Mo<font color="#00FF00">onp<font color="#009900">elt  <font color="#009900"><font color="#00FF00">TM&lt;/font&gt; 12:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get it. $ Coolstar  $  12:55, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Amazing! Awesome! I love it! Make the ear pink more visible though. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  13:43, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the markings a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  16:25, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I used the same exact color. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 01:30, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and sharpen the markings-- Night s h i n e   R  01:34, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried.... Comments? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:07, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripe more on her haunch next to her tail (right where they meet).

Reuploaded Please remmeber to sign your posts with four ~. Better? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 15:51, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights on the tail look like they're in the wrong direction; for the light source to be the same for all of the image, the highlights on the tail should be on the tail-tip and a little bit below on the side that they're on now, but not too much. Also, there's some pixels of too light of a color on the front legs. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 02:05, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 14:35, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

There is an outline of light pixels on the right side of the tail. Add a few more markings of the dark golden onto her haunch and shoulder.-- Night s h i n e   R  16:20, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnpelt Alt Apprentice - For Approval
Can someone redo the highlights for me? It's not fixing. Also, I'm probably not going to work on this until Saturday...unless I'm lucky any old time. -- Quailflight 11:07, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Hurrah for pixlr's color replacement tool! -- Quailflight 11:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some. The ones on her haunch and shoulder look white. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:42, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

That's the problem. I need some help with them. So I would like someone to correct them for me. Quailflight 23:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I was able to fix the bottom highlight, but could someone give me help with the top? -- Quailflight 10:45, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Help and comments? I'm the world's most horrible charart person. I don't know what happened with my style. Quailflight 08:14, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Comments? -- Quailflight 09:28, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading some more. If you can't do it I'll be happy to help. Also, make the earpink brighter but not too bright. I can't see it. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  16:31, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'll do the earpink, but the highlights are killing me. Quailflight 11:07, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Songbird - For Approval
yay guess what ice isn't leaving. :D Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:15, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! You're staying! You need to add tabby stripes and possibly a highlight to her belly area, other than that it's really good. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:20, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:29, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely :) Add a highlight to the face, and blur the highlight on her belly Night  Fall 23:04, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the hanch highlight, otherwise this is stunning :3 Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 00:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, everyone! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 00:22, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on the belly (sort of between the front and back legs) needs more blurring. I really love her color ^^. Blur the back shading some more.-- Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 07:32, June 5, 2010 (UTC)--

Reuploaded. Thanks. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 01:12, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The colour looks a little too pale. Darken the shading and blur all the highlights more. Make the nose colour darker-- Night s h i n e   R  01:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 01:26, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, nose colour, ear pink and highlights. Fill in the white pixel on the arm facing us.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:27, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made the shading really dark.... <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue; border:2px solid; -mox-border-raiuds: 1em;color:white;">Midnighttail I will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 12:08, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading and stripes. → •Maple  fern•  ←  22:30, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading. Darken face, right arm, and belly shading. Lighten the ear pink a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  06:41, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Ice fall 21:10, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and blur it. Darken the stripes Fill in the white pixel on the fore arm. Brighten the white paws a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  16:58, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ice fall 22:56, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Ice fall 23:26, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't look natural. Make them a bit more curved and thicken them. Darken the shading, but not too much. Blur the white transition.-- Night s h i n e   R  01:34, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? Icefall Icy Winds 19:49, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
Oatpaw yay! Comments? (This is 35- there is one discussion) Kaoru   Hitachiin  01:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

He's very nice! Maybe blur the earpink more, and blur the shading (especially the shading under the muzzle) and highlights. Other than that, he looks nice! Holly dapple  01:58, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Kaoru   Hitachiin  23:04, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, you got the shading/highlights thing, but the ear pink is hardly visible now. Holly dapple  01:44, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Kaoru  Hitachiin'''  01:52, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks like a grayish-pink color. It needs to be more of a reddish color. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 15:04, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Kaoru  Hitachiin  00:33, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add some ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  01:34, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is some ear pink, Nightshine, it's just hard to see. It needs to be more like #e18a8a or #d28282, for examples. I think the second number would work better. Holly dapple  03:19, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Kaoru  Hitachiin  11:59, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit more and make it more pinkish/reddish-- Night s h i n e   R  16:17, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (W) - For Approval
I like how he turned out! :3 What about you?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:27, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just blur the top of his head some more (the shading) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 22:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: What else?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:44, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit, it looks a little lighter than his rogue image that is up for approval. Move the ear pink up some more and blur it-- Night s h i n e   R  23:00, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color. 6  Ice thr oat   8  School's out! For summer! 01:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 12:59, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink just a hair, since I can't see it too well, and move the ear pink to the center of the ear rather than on the side. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 14:06, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:33, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to blur the highlights on his haunch and arm a bit more. River pelt Heart of Amber 19:40, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

They look fine to me...are you sure?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah just a bit more you know where the highlight is very bright, like gold colored. River pelt Heart of Amber 19:53, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

They're supposed to be like this. They're supposed to be bright, right?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It depends on the base pelt color. Derken them a tiny bit but not much. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:54, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

THe higlights are very focused, make them a bit bigger and slightly (not much) bigger. It's very good, Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I need help. I can't make them smaller abd darker without re-doing him. Anyone willing to help me?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 16:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

i actually think yhe size is fine. Blurring them some more will darken them a tad. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:05, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart(W) For Approval
This is like...Horrible. Comments?<font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 01:59, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is great!! Just thicken the shading a lot so it is like his medicine cat image. Blur the stripes more-- Night s h i n e   R  02:03, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? GIMP is SO much better than Pixlr's blurring tool! <font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 22:51, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect! This is really nice. :) Moontail  Me Rocks!  14:42, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand where your light source is from. Most images have the shading on the tail, for example, on the bottom. And, the shading needs serious blurring. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   18:50, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Sorry, it just doesn't blur anymore.<font color="Aquamarine">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Aquamarine"> Hail to the awesome WAGE! 20:23, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the other side a little (the lighter one) so that it looks somewhat even? And the ear pink is too small. 雨 晶須  21:55, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred alot more. I can help if you'd like. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:42, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you Ash :) I'd appreciate it. I spent like 5 minutes on blurring!<font color="Turqoise">Sky <font color="Orange">wish16 <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 02:27, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. I've blurred the shading some for you Sky. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan'''  19:39, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I can't tell where the light source is coming from; on the shading of the body it's from one direction, and on the shading of the tail it's from another almost opposite. The light source needs to all be from one direction, so either change the shading on the body or the tail (probably easier on the tail). $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 02:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Buzzardstar - For Approval


I just love doing leaders! This makes my third one I believe :) Well here's Buzzardstar from Battle of The Clans but I think something is missing...comments?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 04:28, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin.-- Night s h i n e   R  05:32, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

His ear pink looks a little too neonish, and the shading could be darkened more (like under the tail and in between legs) 雨  晶須  21:19, June 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Finally able to upload after that long scheduled maintaince. I'm not messing with the ear pink because its the exact color from his deputy image. See below and I was playing with the shading out of boredem before this comment so let me know.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:58, June 4, 2010 (UTC)



I guess the earpink is fine than. Can you darken the shading a tad. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:25, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Done~--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 04:11, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the color of his fur a bit to match his deputy image. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 21:28, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! :) Blur his neck shading a biit. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 23:10, June 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * Sorry for the wait everyone. My intern has started up so my free time is cut to only Fridays and weekends now. Lighten and blurred some--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:40, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * This is very pretty, Shimmerpool, but the one thing I notice is the pupils; they look too big to me. If you don't want to change them, that's fine, but they should be only a pixel wide. Holly  dapple  03:03, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'd like to keep it as I did the same with Bluestar and Blackstar.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:18, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, then nevermind. I didn't want to change Birdy's eyes either. :) It looks great. Holly  dapple  19:33, June 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * It feels good to be able to do this again. Comments before approval? -- Sandy star 10:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ki) - For Approval


Yeah, well, can't say much about this one. Pretty bad, eh? SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 06:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks odd. Try making it bend toward him. Make the stripes more v shaped like his leader image.-- Night s h i n e   R  06:25, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He looks black on my screen. Maybe lighten him a bit? Skydragon Listen...the wind is singing... 14:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow I haven't been on in soooo long... Anyway, he's a tad too dark, like Skydragon said, and I think there are a few gray pixels near the top of his tail (in background). 雨 晶須  21:15, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the top of his tail a bit. It looks mor squished than broken to me. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:45, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've copied the colour from the rogue image, but if it isn't right, then I'll change it. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 13:47, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't exactly understand what you mean by bending the tail, and Ashshadow, how do I make it look broken? Sharpen the bend in the tail? Also, this can only be uploaded again after five - six days. See here. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 13:57, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I just meant thicken the top part a little bit. It looks flatened rather than broken. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:26, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D)- For Approval
Yay! Second charart! =) What should I do to improve it? <font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear pink should be darker, shading needs to be blurred more, and her tail needs more shading. 雨 晶須  23:12, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Close the gaps in the shading and blur it more. Also add shading to the legs and tail. FrostCloud 23:14, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks yellow as opposed to ginger. Try saturating her some Night  Fall 23:19, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, as stated above, and the ear pink needs to be moved more into the ear and lightened. Also, remember to put "For Approval" in the discussion title.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  14:14, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The eye should be made like this: File:Eye Chart.png (see the warrior version), instead of the current eye. The saturation tool is a sponge located near the dodge and shading tools, so use that to saturate the pelt color and give it more of a ginger color. Define the ear pink some more, but not too much. The two hind paws should also have shading, and the top of the head. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 15:35, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading and define the ear pink. Darken the shading on the tail, and add shading to the back paws, and muzzle to the top of the head. The ear not facing us should have shading, too. Ice fall 00:11, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 14:46, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Darken the shading on the main part of her body and darken the earpink. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:37, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well, could be just me, but I don't see any highlights. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 03:33, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Blur the shading-- Night s h i n e   R  03:43, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:20, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Shadings needs to be blurred a bit more and make the ear pink more pinkish, this is good overall ;) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 04:22, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 19:52, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. --  Sky dragon Ride the wind 23:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shadings on the head.. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  02:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:20, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is really sweet :) The back shading is very thick though, maybe thin it a bit? And maybe make the ear pink a bit pinker? On my computer, it looks very red. Brightfrost  of SunClan...  15:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. =) Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:05, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC) - For Approval


There's a discussion, so is this ok to put up? Well, I don't think all of my skills have abandoned me. ^^ Comments? →  Batteh   ←  14:50, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

It looks very nice, Blue. The only thing I see is that the ear pink looks slightly lopsided in the ear. Other than that she looks lovely. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 16:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes a bit lighter. They look brown on my screen. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Bramble. ^^ Straigtened ear pink, lightened eyes. →  Batteh   ←  18:46, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

They still look somewhat brown on my screen unless it cant be lightened more Birdstar 19:03, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

I really don't want to lighten them anymore, they look amber to me. →  Batteh   ←  19:17, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

I agree with Birdstar. Or you can darken the pelt colour a bit more. Blur the ear pink more-- Night s h i n e   R  19:41, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened eyes, although I think they're too light now, and blurred ear pink. →  Batteh   ←  20:46, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

Darken and blur the shading. Make the ear pink a bit smaller.-- Night s h i n e   R  01:40, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

It isn't very bornw, it's more dusty coloured. Make it browner, like Mousefur. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:08, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The description says dusty brown. She doesn't have to change it. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 17:59, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Bluestar1776, but run the burn tool over the shading once or twice and brighten the highlights (if you're using them). Good job! Holly dapple  05:08, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think she should, it's too creamy. It needs to be a bit more browner not a lot. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:55, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - For Approval
There is one discussion, Cinderpelt123, so this should be under the limit. Comments/Criticism for Goldenflower? -- 雨 晶須  20:50, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit. Blur the chest shading. Darken haunch shading-- Night s h i n e   R  20:53, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah blur it a bit more as Nightshine said as the dark ginger looks a bit splotchy on my computer screen:)Wildear~101:) 13:14, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks kinda off with the dark splotches everywhere. Highlight the tail and muzzle more. FrostCloud 15:34, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't she get a cut ear in battle training from Bluepaw?

Scarletwind 21:30, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like she has darker patches of fur on her pelt. Other then that its great :) Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 23:15, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Put a nick in the ear closest to us. Quailflight 08:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The darker patches of fur are supposed to be shading, and I can't blur them any more. And yes, I'll add the nick in her ear. 雨 晶須  01:51, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

She looks slightly lumpy. Try blurring those dark parts more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D)~For approval


Okay now I look at this I can now see some major changes but here he is improvements please?

Edit how do you change the pxl on it so I can get it 127x155 pxl I'm not sure if its my computer or not...

Oh yeah thisis the biggest size I could get him....:)Wildear~101:) 13:12, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

First,he's a tabby, second, sorry, but it's over the limit.<span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">Gol den <span style="Font-family:AR Cena;Background:#567890;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raidus:0.20em; color:darkblue">thorn Epic! 14:00, June 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * For future reference Wildear, remember to sign with 4 ~ and to get a bigger picture of the blank you have to right click the blanks and select open in new window or new tab. That way you'll have the full size of the blank. With the galleries installed, it takes away the feature of copying the direct size of the image. Stated before this is over the limit so this will have to be declined.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:44, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok sorry I thought this might've been ok but I must've counted it wrong...yeah I realised my computer must be wrong in a way I'll take your advice to heart Shimmerpool.:)Wildear~101:) 21:27, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok sorry I thought this might've been ok but I must've counted it wrong...yeah I realised my computer must be wrong in a way I'll take your advice to heart Shimmerpool.:)Wildear~101:) 21:27, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wildear; this can stay here as two images were just approved and there is now room. But for future reference, please count more carefully. Do what Shimmer said and redo the image in the full-sized blank and make him a tabby cat. Also, please put a link in your signature by typing Wildear~101 into your preferences. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 00:20, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay thanks Bramble I'll get it reuploaded for tomorrow:)Wildear~101:) 18:26, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED~ Better? It was what I could at short notice I got art project so I fitted it in anyways!:)Wildear~101:) 19:59, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's not a bad tabby but it needs to look more like his other images here. Also make the earpink more triangular. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:01, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby markings need to be bigger like his other images, and make the earpink more pinkish and blur it some more. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 14:11, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded~Ear pink made more triangular thickened stripes and blurred some more also add some more colour on his haunches anything else?:)Wildear~101:) 19:49, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

He has to many stripes and his color is off. Try taking the color from this--->. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:11, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED~Gave him less stripes and gave him a more brownish grey affect licke his elder image. Like Ash said...anything elses? :)Wildear~101:) 16:18, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes need to strech out father like this: Hope that helps!. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  01:47, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okey dokey I'll get it done for saturday as I am busy a few days:)Wildear~101:) 21:11, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Make sure the stripes don't over lap the line art. Fix the eye and darken the ear pink-- Night s h i n e   R  01:36, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

He still looks closer to gray to me than gray-brownish like or whatever he is. I think lightening him should do or unsaturating.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay made him look more the colour he is made sure the lines didn't overlap fixed the eye and darkened ear pink. So anything else? :)Wildear~101:) 13:38, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Fernpelt (A) - For approval
This wasn't too hard. → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:31, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nice highlights! Just lighten the ear pink to make it more visible. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 00:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't really look like her warrior image. Lighten the eye colour. Did you take the colours from her warrior image?-- Night s h i n e   R  01:03, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the color could be a little darker but I think the stripes look fine. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  10:47, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and sharper. Ice fall 00:51, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on his haunch could use some more bluring along with his front legs. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 14:12, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try to lighten her ear pink. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:07, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Maplefern, good work! The ear pink could be paler, but maybe in the same section of reddish-pink. The shoulder highlight needs bluring, and the stripes on her haunch look too blurry to me. Other than that, it' really good! Holly dapple  22:58, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Morningstar (L) - For Approval
I based this off his image in Battles of the Clans. This should be right under the limit Comments?-- Night s h i n e   R  00:31, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

He looks very nice! =D I'd just blur the edges around his white fur a little more. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 00:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thank you! I blurred the white some more-- Night s h i n e   R  01:07, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

He looks awsome! Maybe blur the white under his eyes just a tiny bit more.  Sky dra gon    Follow the wind...  14:47, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white under eyes-- Night s h i n e   R  01:31, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes near his neck. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   02:14, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred neck stripes-- Night s h i n e   R  23:33, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! So beautiful! I know I'm being picky but maybe blur the right side of the 'M' on the forehead and the striped on the front, left leg. Really is beautiful! :D Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  18:10, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred M and leg stripes-- Night s h i n e   R  23:49, June 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Comments before approval? -- Sandy star 10:28, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Shading looks good and the stripes are brilliant! Wildear~101  14:48, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Shading looks good and the stripes are brilliant! Wildear~101  14:48, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy(A)- Declined


Oops I got it declined...I think this is over the limit, but still...I'm sorry, Ash, I was joking. ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  11:11, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Here's not really the place to joke but all is forgiven. Blur the highlights more. Besides that this is really good. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:13, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear shading some more and add shading or darken them, because I cannot see any. Its really good :3 Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 04:19, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hehe reuploaded ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  11:17, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Due to the user in question falling below the age requirement for joining wikia, this image will be declined and archived later.

Yes; that was me. Fail on my part not signing. :) --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 11:11, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar(K)-for approval


Hope this goes better than the last time

i think i could do a bit more for the tabby stripes on his shoulder...

Scarletwind 02:03, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Er it's good but this is the 36 but you can only have 35 Birdy 02:12, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hi, It's okay, but the stripes look a little bit unreal. Blur the shading and I de-thumbed it. SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:30, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

ok then make the ear pink and the nose Birdy 11:44, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some more and make the ear pink more pinkish. Dawnleaf Chickon Thursday!!!!! 14:13, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more like this?

Scarletwind 14:19, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more.. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  02:49, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Third time's the charm... I hope, I hope...

Scarletwind 22:50, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Don't rename the file every time. Just re-upload it. There is an outline of black around the ear pink and it is touching the line art-- Night s h i n e   R  23:20, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I'll get it eventually... I hope.. I hope...

Scarletwind 23:21, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is it just me or is that ear pink purple? It is on my computer. :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 09:09, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

It does look kind of purple...  Sky dragon Ride the wind 18:16, June 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * They look like the shading for a black or white cat which we don't need for Tigerkit. Just get the pink from his other images and it'll be fine. Also it looks like you made an outline for the ears, heh, I notice small things. Could you get rid of those and just blur the ear pink?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:11, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more if you can. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hope this looks OK, I'm going away tomorrow and I won't be able to fix it for a few days

Scarletwind 01:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers up for aproval (again)
Okay, I tried to make it better, here it is I ran the burn tool along some more-as you told me too. Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 17:01, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading looks nice. Try making the ear pink a little bigger and darkening it up a bit, like on Reedwhisker or Breezepelt. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:25, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. I don't really see any-- Night s h i n e   R  23:29, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darkened the shading a little, and I darkened the ear-pink. Better? Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 16:33, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The whole thing still needs to be darkened. It looks like a dark gray cat on my computer. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:17, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's dark-grey on my computer, I think you should darken it. :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 09:08, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yea darken it so it looks more black. <font color="#009900">Mo <font color="#00FF00">onp <font color="#009900">elt <font color="#00FF00">TM 18:03, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Amberclaw- For Approval
I'm sorry that I'm one over the limit, but I've been waiting for a couple of days now. =P Anyway, comments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 01:02, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit so it will be declined-- Night s h i n e   R  01:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Nightshine. I guess I just got impatient. =P I won't do it again. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 01:40, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

It can stay now. Blur the back shading. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  16:19, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, guys. I feel bad about it now. Anyway, I tried to blur the back shading more, but the blur tool on Pixlr is a little iffy. Is this better or does it need more? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 13:53, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

If your having trouble with blur tool reduce the hardness a bit I ussually have it 41 for minor adjustments or even fifty for big shadings and i use the size 9 to go blur my things. Try doing that it might work :)Wildear~101:) 21:16, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Pearnose (MC) - For Approval
With one declined and three discussions this makes the 35th. I just loved her name and had to give her a go... though I think I've lost the knack. Anyway, constructments? -- Sandy star 23:41, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Adorable Sandy. Just blur the ear pink just a tad. :3 . Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  23:45, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

You should fix the 'lost the knack' into 'gotten even more wonderful with art'. XD The pelt and the eye color are absolutely beautiful. The only thing I see that needs fixing is that the herbs are missing some shading. The ear pink actually looks pretty good; I'd only blur it a small bit. <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 23:50, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! Darken the tail stripes. Did you change the line art on the eye?-- Night s h i n e   R  23:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded: Lineart fixed, stripes darkened, earpink blurred and shading/highlights added to the herbs. -- Sandy star 00:09, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks great Sandy, all I see is that the muzzle shading should be darkened a tad. Lol, agreed Bramble. Ice  fall 00:24, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It seems a little dark. Lighten it a tad-- Night s h i n e   R  00:27, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I kept looking at it for 10 minutes, trying to find a flaw, but could not. Excellent work, congrats! Helixtalk 05:35, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's beautiful! You would never lose the knack Sandy! Comments before approval anyone? SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 07:24, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded: Nightshine - I reluctantly lightened her (I liked the old colour myself, but ya know). Ice - I have not darkened the muzzle shading as that is highlighted not shaded to start with. Helix - Glad you like her :) Sunspirit - Again, I am glad you like her but I'm afraid only senior warriors can approve images or set the 24 hours =) Anything else? -- Sandy star 09:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * She looks good, I see nothing wrong with her. Icefall  Icy Winds 12:08, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * Sandy, you have to stop making me feel inferior! LOL, Pearnose looks gorgeous. Only thing I see is blur the shading on the haunch.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  18:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded: Shading blurred. Anything else? -- Sandy star 19:48, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I liked the old (dark) version better, it was much nicer; this looks "dusty" because of the unsaturated color. Of course, this is only my opinion; what do you all think? Kind regards, Helixtalk 20:22, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I really like the new one. Just add another stripe near the tail tip-- Night s h i n e   R  01:37, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm with Helix. The herb shading is a bit off. The bottom right is a dark while the others are light. Sorry to by picky, your work is always wonderful to see, Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:18, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I liked its original pelt color as well. It was richer, as well as a dark brown whereas the new version looks just like a regular old brown. That can be easily fixed by saving one of the past revisions of the image, should you so choose, Sand. And Fawnstorm, how should the herb shading be oriented? You weren't very clear about that; it looks fine to me right now. Are there any other comments about the pelt, so we can reach a consensus? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 05:11, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I have to admit that I'd already got a darkened version with the same improvements made as the lighter version on my computer because I preferred it... I only changed the colour because I was asked to ;) So I have uploaded that and will fix the herbs as soon as I know what to fix - the extra stripe will be added at the same time. -- Sandy star 13:21, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink a bit I can barely see it Wildear~101  14:23, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (W) - For Approval
Epic fail....she was a challenege thats for sure. Comments?. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  01:43, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh sorry nevermind this is over the limit...it going to have to been declined..... Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  02:00, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's okay, some images just got approved so this is under the limit again but please be careful next time. Image-wise, darken the shading on the white fur some, and add a couple more cream patches to the tail. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 02:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Will do.. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  02:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: Added more cream patches onto the tail, and darkend the shading on the whiet fur. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  03:00, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Define the patches and lighten the ear pink some. Icefall Icy Winds 11:47, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry if this sounds a bit silly, but what do you mean by "define"? Does that mean I should Saturate it?. Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  00:04, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, like... I mean un-blur the ear pink. There's an eaiser way to do it - just line the brush/pencil around it and blur it some. It was too blurred before. Icefall Icy Winds 00:08, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this is really pretty! You did a great job with her, Dawnleaf! My only advice would be to make the ear pink less dark red and more salmon-pink. Otherwise, this is very beautiful. Holly dapple  03:07, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: Thanks Holly, I lightened the ear pink a bit and thats it, Icefall, you kindda confused me a bit so i didn't define the patches... Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 03:53, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, I meant the patches, and I'm sorry. I would say smudge the patches a bit. Icefall Icy Winds 14:28, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

The white patch on the front leg looks a bit odd to me. Maybe color it in to match the rest of her leg. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:32, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

What white patch? Do you mean the front white paw? I'm confused :\ Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 16:28, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

No its above the paw. It's kinda hard to explain. It's a gap between the leg and the rest of the body. Does that help? Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  16:31, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: Did you mean that I should do that to the leg? Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 22:47, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yup. Thats exactly what I meant. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:50, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, okay good. Dawn leaf The Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 23:36, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Looks wonderful. Comments before approval? <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 00:54, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Featherwing (W) - For Approval
I think I'm starting to lose my charart abilities, this looks pretty bad. I counted the number of images, and this should be under the limit (number 34 or 35). Comments and suggestions? $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 02:19, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No your not! This is just lovely Ice, just darken the shading a bit and blur the ear pink. . Dawnleaf. Deputy of SnowClan  02:50, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks dark enough. Darken the highlights a bit-- Night s h i n e   R  03:18, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't know if I darkened the highlights enough or not. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 03:30, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I think this is over the limit. It will probably be declined. SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 09:00, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, I counted, and this is image number 34. When you count, you don't include declined images or discussion sections that aren't archived yet. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 14:11, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! maybe just lighten the ear pink a bit. But otherwise, beautiful! :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 07:20, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. $   Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 14:16, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is fantastic, Icethroat! The only thing I see that could be fixed is the eye color; I think it should be a lighter shade of the same blue, if you know what I mean. Holly dapple  05:10, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments, everybody. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 01:52, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (R) - For Approval
Well, I'm not sure how this went. Shruggy talk 07:07, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, except you'll notice that there's a black flick on the white chest, maybe lighten the ear pink a bit, but otherwise good! SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 07:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The Black flick, is part of the line art. ;) Shruggy talk 08:56, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh Sorry! Laughs SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:58, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Might just be me Shruggy, but did you pick pure black for the colour? It needs to be light black, dark grey. I can't see the lineart. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  11:47, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, he didn't. This is well done Shruggy. Blur the white, and lighten the pelt color a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 12:06, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also added shading to the back ear. :) Shruggy talk 13:55, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I was on a school comp and it looked really black, it dosen't now. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:21, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Shruggy talk 08:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Looks Great Shruggy! I've been looking at it, couldn't find anything that bad! :<font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki">Sun <font color="#FFCC33" style="background:Khaki">spirit <font color="#FFFF33" style="background:Khaki"> ☮ 08:35, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible for you to smudge the white more? Like a fade in? And I think it would look a tiny bit better it there was some shading on the white part on the chest. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:46, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Categorizing Chararts
Hi all! I would like to suggest to project coordinators to place all approved charart in the relevant image categories when approving. This will not only keep it more organized; it will also help in making statistics, running scripts, keeping track of things etc.

I'm currently manually going through all approved images to update their categories if needed; it will be done soon, but for new images, the approver should do it. Note: only approved images should go in these, do not add declined or user chararts here.

I hope this doesn't come down the wrong way; I'm not trying to act as a leader and tell people what to do or such; it's just a proposal for keeping things together. I hope you won't be angry with me. :)

Kind regards, Helixtalk 18:19, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with this. It sounds ideal. What do you think, Bramble??  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  20:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I've been meaning to do this in any case. It's a good idea to have our images categorized so they can be kept track of, and less work to do later. I think everyone else will agree as well. And Helix; don't worry yourself over nothing, it's merely a suggestion you thought up and proposed. Thank you. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 05:05, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Bramble, many thanks for your kind reply. I'm currently done with letters A-H and hopefully I will finish them by the end of next week. I also made a table here listing the approved chararts by type, by counting the number of files in the respective categories. Helixtalk 05:40, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (W)- For Approval
Declined images and discussions don't count. So, I took Dapplepelt's med. image and tried to work it to match the warrior one- and epically failed. Thanks to Bramble for helping. I also edited the highlights a bit.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  18:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the gold patch on the nose a little more.  Sky dragon Ride the wind 19:30, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the gold patches on the nose, the tail tip, and the creamish one in the middle.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  20:13, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Echostar, I didn't change the colors because that was the effects of the highlights.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  20:15, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The line art looks smudged around the muzzle. Blur the tail patches some more-- Night s h i n e   R  00:45, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The lineart was fine. Mo   us  et  al  on   !! <font color="#7a009a">Here comesSUMMER!   20:22, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there are dark splotches around the whiskers-- Night s h i n e   R  06:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Bluestar - Declined
Well, here she is! My first charart! How is she?



First, this is not a blank from warriors wiki. Second, you have to post this at the very bottom of the talk page. Third, you forgot to sign, and fourth, Bluestar already has all her needed chararts-- Night s h i n e   R  06:26, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I added back the section you deleted. Please don't delete or archive anything from this page unless you are leader, deputy, or a senior warrior-- Night s h i n e   R  06:32, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Tweak Week Discussion
Erm… I may have gone overboard with this, but since I’ve been delaying planning it for so long I wanted to give you all the best planning I had. Here’s the link to the discussion: link. I’d suggest that you plan to read it at a time where you don’t have to leave the computer in two minutes, because I sort of wrote a lot. :) Wanted to make sure everything was taken care of and we wouldn’t have chaos again and would be at top efficiency. I’d be happy to hear all your ideas! --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 06:38, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudstar(W)- For Approval
Not much to say. He was harder to do than expected. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:00, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

He looks really good Ashshadow! but just brighten the white pixel on his eye. River pelt Heart of Amber 22:24, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the rump and hind leg. :) So beautifuuull! Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  14:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 14:31, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  15:56, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the white pixel in the eye. Blur the patch on his shoulder some more-- Night s h i n e   R  16:12, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded.  Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan'''  19:59, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W)- For Approval
I made a re-do. Accidentally erased old message here XD Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  21:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad. His earpink is a bit lopsided and his eye is a bit neon. Fix those and maybe add/brighten highlights or shorten the shading. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink, dampened eye. Brightened highlights and blurred well. Comments? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  14:22, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger or shorten the shading again. Make the ear pink bigger and darken it-- Night s h i n e   R  16:13, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, The one on the left is the same one, just I edited it. The one on the right is a whole new one. Which one is best and I should keep edititng?? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  17:33, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Both are nice, but the one on the right looks more normal to me. On the muzzle, if you choose the one on the right, the highlights need to be brightened, and the haunch and shoulder highlights need blurring. The shading on his back could be darkened as well. Holly dapple  19:29, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hope it looks good! First time I actually did highlights like that... Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  21:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

They look good for your first time. Just blur them some more. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:07, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Cherryfur123- Request to Join
I saw that on the front page, it said that if you wanted to join you had to leave a message on the talk page. I was just wondering if I could join?

Cherryfur123 17:15, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Of course you can! Someone will add you in ASAP! -- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 17:56, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

You've been added. These links can help you: here and here. Thanks for your interest in joining! --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 01:06, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Dappletail (A) - For Approval
Here's Dappletail as an apprentice. And on that note, I'm back for the 5th time! xD I'm not sure I like the shading, so what are your comments? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#949494">Warrior♥ <font face="Tempus Sans ITC" color="#7A7A7A">Warrior's Den 17:49, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this is over the limit. Wait until the number of charats go down to 34 or less. The image will be declined. Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  18:07, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't Nightfall have this reserved...? Icefall Icy Winds 19:35, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, she has Rabbittail reserved-- Night s h i n e   R  19:39, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back, Warrior. This won't be declined, it's under the limit. Image-wise, this doesn't really look like any of Dappletail's other images. This image has patches, and the others have stripes. Also, I can't really see the ear pink, and the shading on the muzzle is too dark to see the lineart. $  Ice thr oat   %  Exploring  through the   galaxies... 01:45, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Policy: Image Use addendum
Regarding the Naming conventions in Image Use: for Tribe names I'd like to point out that Sandy created a template that internally converts the character name in a short name for the image. So the following should be used for Tribe name images: Brook.ph.png (instead of Brook Where Small Fish Swim.ph.png), Gray.ph.png etc.

We forgot to announce it to you all; sorry if this created a confusion. The Image Use policy page should be updated accordingly.

Kind regards, Helixtalk 20:24, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (R)- For Approval
I was gone again, it was rather sudden. I've also been SOO busy with school (I'm homeschooled... basically I'm doing finals I guess?) Anyway, I changed the shoulder and ear. Dark hallows 04:47, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more and blur the tail shading-- Night s h i n e   R  06:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Whitetail (A) for appravl
My first apprentice this is the 34 this is another white cat fail so yeah comments?  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 14:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add earpink. Kaoru  Hitachiin  14:27, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Moss (Q) - For Approval
There are four discussions and two declined images, so this is technically under the limit. Anyway, it was my birthday four days ago:D -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 14:52, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Happy beleated birthday, Hawk! :) This image is lovely. All I see is that a highlight could be added on the face and tail. Icefall  Icy Winds 14:55, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Icestorm:) Added highlights to the face and tail. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö      15:05, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC) - Declined
How is it?:) :) MOSSY RULES! 14:59, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Mossstar, but this'll have to be declined because it's over the limit and someone has a Shy Fawn image for approval already. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 15:08, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh well it was my first image. next tine i'll do better.:) MOSSY RULES! 15:13, June 13, 2010 (UTC)