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TWEAK/REDO NOMINATIONS ARE CURRENTLY: OPEN/ CLOSED, BARRING THE NOMINATIONS ALREADY POSTED (see the list below for images to tweak or redo)

=Nominations= If you wish to nominate an image, you link the image (like so - ) underneath the appropriate subheading, and list the reason(s) you wish it to be redone/tweaked. Project members with the ranking of warrior or above can vote, and only five votes are necessary for the vote to pass or fail.

(NOTE: Do not nominate queen images, the blanks are in the process of being redone)

Oatwhisker (TC) ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Oatwhisker (TC).warrior.png could just be my kindle, but I think the shading is rather flat. It could be use some defining or be redone. Might I snag this? I'll be back from Spain Thursday. 14:34, August 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * He looks a tad shiny too. 14:46, August 17, 2013 (UTC)
 * I love this shading. Also, I do not think that this looks shiny. 19:15, August 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * I just think the head and legs need some defining of the unshaded parts. I don't think he looks shiny, though... 01:27, August 19, 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think he looks shiny either.  But yeah, it needs defining. 02:23, August 19, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing
 * I'm agreeing with Duck here. This is a really good image.
 * Looks flat to me, imho.
 * 01:04, August 21, 2013 (UTC)
 * Should I try define or redo the shading? 16:52, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Please, just define it, I really really love this shading and I'd hate to see it totally redone. 20:36, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Leafstar's Mother.star.png Needs to be pale, as she is said to look exactly like her daughter, and I'd like this if it passes, if Scar doesn't want it 02:10, August 24, 2013 (UTC)


 * Not the queen image, remember.  02:33, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * whoops I've fixed that 02:34, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * The queen should get it too. 02:39, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Well, Duck, the queen image is going to get put onto the new blanks so I don't see why tweak it now when it will be redone late o3o 02:43, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Whoops, forgot about that, nevermind. 02:46, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 22:02, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Lionheart ~ Tweak Nomination
File:Lionheart.kit.png and all. His description says that he is pale, but I don't think he looks pale. Could just be me. If this passes, I'd like the kit and the warrior images if the OAs don't want them. 13:32, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * They are fine. 17:08, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Henry ~ Redo Nomination
File:Henry.kittypet.png Fully prepared to be shot, but the shading seems really quite sorceless to me, hard to see in places, and hard to tell where the light is even hitting. The stripes are also quite overblurred. I would like this if it passes. 07:13, August 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * I can agree. 19:03, August 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * 19:05, August 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * Please keep the pattern, though. I really like this one and I think that too many of the old patterns are disappearing. x3 19:13, August 18, 2013 (UTC)
 * His eyes right now are too darn cool, if you could use that style. X3

Bramblestar - Redo Nomination
File:Bramblestar.leader.png - Ok, I'm going to get shot for this, but honestly, he and Tigerstar (and Hawkfrost too, I think, I'm not exact on that but I'll check r later) are the /exact copy of each other/. It was said in starlight, and I don't have the quote because I don't have my book on me, but it was when Brambleclaw saw Tigerstar in his dream and was shocked by the similarities between them (he swore he could've been looking at his reflection in a pool.) So...if Hawkfrost is also said to look the same as them, I think we should start by making Bramblestar and Tigerstar the same tabby pattern as Hawkfrost. Edit: I'd like the leader if possible. 01:30, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Could I have the kit, deputy, and warrior? 01:33, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think that Tigerstar's images should be left; Hawkfrost instead should be redone to match his father o3o. However I think I agree with this one so go ahead. 01:35, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 01:35 Fri Aug 23
 * Oh, and can I have the leader if this passes? 01:36, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Could I have the apprentice if this passes? 01:39, 08/23/2013
 * I'm sorry but I disagree. Instead of redoing two sets of images, then why not Hawkfrost be redone? It seems more sensible if Hawkfrost is supposed to match them.
 * I agree with Stoney. Why redo two sets of images when you can redo one set instead? And not just because I love Bramblestar and believed in him when all you people were doubtin. 05:17, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'd say go with Hawkfrost 09:51, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Hawkfrost has a specified tabby pattern, though.
 * Yes, but the current images of Tigerstar and Bramblestar are basically mackeral tabbies, imo.
 * Going with Hawkfrost, since these two are mackerel tabbies and might as well just do one. 19:01 Fri Aug 23 2013

I know this already has enough votes, but like Breezy said, why redo two when you can just redo one? It's a lot of unneeded work, and if we don't need to redo both then we shouldn't.  19:07, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * After seeing the other's comments I now disagree on this nomination 19:12, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * I can agree. If they look the same, they should, like with Firestar and Jake. 17:10, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Tigerstar - Redo Nomination
File:Tigerstar.rogue.png The same thing as above. 01:30, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think that Tigerstar's images should be left; Hawkfrost instead should be redone to match his father o3o. 01:36, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 01:33, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * One, is it okay if I take the set (someone can have Bramblestar if they want), apparently that's allowed here, and two, Bbun, Hawkfrost has been described to be a mackerel tabby while Tigerstar and Bramblestar's stripes have never been stated. I think by logic, since they're all identical, we should make them match Hawkfrost. 01:38, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * I agree with Icy, especially Hawkfrost's type of tabby has been said. 01:39, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Agreeing with above 01:42, 08/23/2013
 * Icy said I could get the deputy. 01:44 Fri Aug 23
 * I'm sorry but I disagree. Instead of redoing two sets of images, then why not Hawkfrost be redone? It seems more sensible if Hawkfrost is supposed to match them.
 * I'd say go with Hawkfrost 09:51, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Standing by Icy with this one.
 * As I said, I see no reason to redo Hawkfrost to match Bramblestar and Tigerstar. One, Bramblestar and Tigerstar don't even look like each other in terms of tabby pelt, which has said to match identically, and two, Hawkfrost is the only cat to have a specified tabby pattern. Since Bramblestar and Tigerstar are described to look exactly like him, with the same tabby pelt, I believe that'd make them mackerels. So it seems logical to me to redo them to match Hawkfrost. 11:55, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Agreeing with Icy. 15:15, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Just saying, the current images of Tigerstar and Bramblestar are basically mackeral tabbies, imo.
 * Going with Hawkfrost, since these two are mackerel tabbies and might as well just do one. 19:01 Fri Aug 23 2013

I know this already has enough votes, but like Breezy said, why redo two when you can just redo one? It's a lot of unneeded work, and if we don't need to redo both then we shouldn't.  19:07, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * We can't just redo one because Hawkfrost already matches. He's already shown as a mackerel tabby, and he's fine. Tigerstar and Bramblestar are not similar to each other as they should be, and are not seen mackerel tabbies, as they should be. Hawkfrost is given a tabby type already, and already matches that description. It would make no sense to redo a cat with a listed description and not redo the ones it's supposed to resemble. 19:33 Fri Aug 23
 * A mackerel tabby is defined as being narrow, vertical, gently curved stripes that are either solid or broken, and they have an "m" on their forehead. Minus "m" on the forehead (which Hawkfrost doesn't have either), Bramblestar and Tigerstar meet this definition as well as Hawkfrost does, even if their stripes are a little less defined due to the dark background the rest upon. Not even the narrow point is really all that valid, as Hawkfrost's stripes aren't even more narrow than the other two. I'd encourage you to look at mackerel tabbies and compare them to all three images. They can all fit the description of mackerel tabby with relative ease for an inch-by-inch pixel blank. That being said, while redoing both Bramblestar and Tigerstar would get you the same result, just doing Hawkfrost would make much more sense. And as for these guys not matching each other, the only difference I really see is a few stripes on Bramblestar's underbelly, which could be a relatively easy tweak on Tigerstar, and either way, not many "identical" chararts look alike beyond the coat and stripe colors, as you can see with Jake and Firestar, or Rose and Lily. 21:46 Fri Aug 23 2013
 * He is fine, and the others can all be redone to match Tigerstar or Hawkfrost. 17:11, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm just going to explain why I nominated him. Tigerstar and Bramblestar don't match /each other/. In the books they have been said to be an identical copy of each other, and right now, they're not at all. The stripes don't match each other while they have been said to have the exact same tabby coat. I agree Hawkfrost isn't exactly a mackerel, but that can be tweaked, and if he is tweaked, then I believe Bramblestar and Tigerstar should be done at mackerels and they should all match each other. Bramblestar is an example of a mackerel, so it's possible that Hawkfrost and Tigerstar could be done to match him. But as I said, I still think that Bramblestar and Tigerstar need to be redone to match each other, and that all three need to have the same tabby coat. 18:29, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Thornclaw - Redo Nomination
File:Thornclaw.warrior.png Ok I'm going to get shot for this as well but really the stripes are too blurred and smudged and they don't seem to fit in well and the shading seems blotchy. I'm not sure if you want to redo the entire set but I added it just in case because the apprentice and kit look a bit blotchy to me too. 01:40, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * If this passes may I have this set? 01:43, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think the kit could be redone however.
 * 09:50, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17:05, 08/23/2013
 * 17:10, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * I asked Beebs and she said I could do these. 17:20, 23, 08, 2013

18:55, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18:59 Fri Aug 23 2013
 * I know I'm late here, but the stripes don't really look like stripes at all (he looks mottled or spotted) except on the face, and he is a tabby, and I agree that it should be redone. 22:08, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * You're not late, Knight. I agree with you.
 * It is true what you say, and I was also thinking of nominating this at some point. 23:59, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think that they're fine, possibly a slight tweak, but that's it. 00:04, August 25, 2013 (UTC)
 * 18:17 Sun Aug 25

Hawkfrost ~ Redo Nomination
File:Hawkfrost.rogue.png and others, save for the alts. prepares to get shot Since quite a few people have suggested to redo Hawkfrost to match his dad, as they're said to look alike, and his dad is a mackerel, like Hawkfrost. If this passes I'd like the warrior and deputy. 19:12, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Would it be alright if I had the apprentice? I've always wanted to work on one of his images but if it's not then alright 19:16, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Sure thing Ivy, you can have him (and I'm making the pattern as well, as although he will try to look as similar as his dad as possible, he'll sport the other features ie: his white belly) 19:18, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Hawkfrost is a mackerel tabby, there's no need to redo him. Tigerstar is not done as a mackerel. Shouldn't it be the other way around? 19:30 Fri Aug 23
 * I think you all are missing my point here, so I'm going to put it in bold and italics and hope that it comes across. Hawkfrost is a mackerel tabby. Bramblestar's pattern is one, but it does not match Hawkfrost like it was said to. Tigerstar is not a mackerel tabby. Bramblestar and Tigerstar do not match each other. They should match Hawkfrost, as Hawkfrost was given a specified tabby pattern. The point is not redoing two when you can redo one - and to be honest, wheres the problem with that? The entire project likes doing that these days. 19:36, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * ^ 20:34, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * Icy is exactly correct. Yes, the images are nice, but they need to follow a description. Hawkfrost's does, and there's no need to redo it. Bramblestar and Tigerstar, however, do not match each other, and by proxy on Bramble, they both need to match Hawkfrost.
 * Same as above. 20:53, 08/23/2013
 * A mackerel tabby is defined as being narrow, vertical, gently curved stripes that are either solid or broken, and they have an "m" on their forehead. Minus "m" on the forehead (which Hawkfrost doesn't have either), Bramblestar and Tigerstar meet this definition as well as Hawkfrost does, even if their stripes are a little less defined due to the dark background the rest upon. Not even the narrow point is really all that valid, as Hawkfrost's stripes aren't even more narrow than the other two. I'd encourage you to look at mackerel tabbies and compare them to all three images. They can all fit the description of mackerel tabby with relative ease for an inch-by-inch pixel blank. That being said, while redoing both Bramblestar and Tigerstar would get you the same result, just doing Hawkfrost would make much more sense. And as for these guys not matching each other, the only difference I really see is a few stripes on Bramblestar's underbelly, which could be a relatively easy tweak on Tigerstar, and either way, not many "identical" chararts look alike beyond the coat and stripe colors, as you can see with Jake and Firestar, or Rose and Lily. 21:47 Fri Aug 23 2013

My reasoning is the same reasoning as Brezzy's statement above. And just because we like redoing pictures, does that necessarily mean that we should redo two perfectly good images that actually do fit just because we want to? 23:31, August 23, 2013 (UTC)
 * I agree with breezy and Ivy ^

Twist - Redo Nomination
File:Twist.rogue.png She's a bit overblurred and kinda shiny. Leggy said she wants her. 1:28 Sat Aug 24 2013
 * 01:31, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Also it might be just me but her ginger markings look a bit green. 01:34, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 01:47, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
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Lily ~ Redo Nomination
File:Lily.kittypet.png This could be a tweak but I'll just leave it here for now. Anyway, the lightsource is a bit iffy, like on the face/body it looks like it's coming from <-- but on the legs and tail it's like -->, the shading could use defining in places and blurring in others, it's a tad...not shiny, i don't know how to describe it on the body, and the pattern is a bit overblurred. If this passes and I don't got shot I'd like this. <span style="">01:54 Sat Aug 24
 * A tweak. 01:56, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * 17:54, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Agreed, only a tweak is needed to define shading  22:53, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * If you'd like, why not try reaching Loonie for the file? She's active on tumblr, and she might still have the old file for this.
 * Agreeing. <span style="">18:15 Sun Aug 25

Brightspirit (W) ~ Redo Nomination
File:Brightspirit.warrior.png The images do not match each other at all. On the warrior, she seems much darker and the stripes are overblurred compared to the StarClan image. It should be made to match the StarClan image. 17:54, August 24, 2013 (UTC)


 * I don't think the warrior's being used at all, because we don;t know if she was ever a warrior. 18:02, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * The narrator does describe her as a "dead warrior" in Long Shadows, but I can't remember which page. It's sometime when she takes him to the catmint. 18:24, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * I think Mallowfur's the same case.... I believe warrior was used as a general term? I've seen leaders still called warriors of StarClan, so.. uh... Regardless, if we're still using it, I'll swipe this, since I did the StarClan image and the colors aren't what they seem.
 * If it turns out that we are using the image, then yes, it does need to be redone. However, both points are equally valid and I'm not too sure which one to go with. 22:43, August 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Them not matching was my foul to begin with, as I was told that I didn't need to match the warrior image since it wasn't being used at all.
 * I understand, Cloudy. ^^ 00:00, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Daisyheart (D) - Redo Nomination
File:Daisyheart.deputy.png - Light source is kinda iffy and the colors and pattern is pretty strange. If this passes, I'd like it, please 22:12, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

=Approved Tweaks= Once an image is under this heading, it may be reserved on the project main page and crossed out with a and a. The image may only be removed from this list when it is approved and archived.

Senior warriors are to keep track of the number of images on this list, including those that are crossed out. Should the number rise above 50, nominations will close and remain closed until the number of images on the list is down to 40.

Tweaks

 * File:Cinderpelt.apprentice.png - Shading tweak (Reserved to Duck until 8/21/13)
 * File:Cinderpelt.mca.png - Shading tweak (Reserved to Raven until 8/21/13)
 * File:Leafstar.rogue.png - Make paler.
 * File:Jay.kittypet.png - Add greying fur, mange.
 * File:Newtspeck.warrior.png - Pattern tweak.
 * File:Moss (KP).kittypet.png - Shading tweak (Reserved to Stoner until 8/21/13)
 * File:Sol.kit.png - Needs tufted tail
 * File:Sol.kittypet.png - Needs tufted tail (Reserved to Ferk until 8/14/2013)
 * File:Sol.warrior.png - Needs tufted tail

Redos

 * File:Brook.loner.png - Stripes don't flow well
 * File:Millie.loner.png - stripes don't match each other (Reserved to Raven until 8/21/13)
 * File:Millie.kittypet.png - stripes don't match each other; shading needs to be defined (Reserved to Raven until 8/21/13)
 * File:Rosetail.apprentice.png - Stripes are unnatural, needs to be more pink-ish orange (Reserved to Beebs until 8/21/13)