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Echosong (loner) ~ For Approval
yeah i dont like this --

I think it’s good! Could you define the shading, though? 23:29, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

The stripes on the legs could be smudged out more, and maybe have one or two more stripes on the haunch that go more diagonally between the ones that go just downwards and just > way. iirc also the muzzle should be pale and the stripes go lightly over the chest, to match the other images

Re-uploaded sorry school's been beating me up with a stick and i had no motivation to do anything other than play animal crossing and make plans to overthrow the admins on the wiki discord in my downtime --

oh noes. also, the stripes on the flank could still fill more space (see starclan version) and could you define/darken the shading?

Still working? 19:01, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

Spiresight (GC) - For Approval
this took like forever to finish, rip because GIMP wanted to crash But I am the Chosen One 17:12, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is great c: 03:55, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups also thanks But I am the Chosen One 05:57, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Did you add the texture? With as dark as this is, it's pretty hard to see. If you did, lighten the base a tad so we can tell what's what. For reference, the StarClan image is the first in this set. (  19:28, 6/26/2018  ) ​

Re-Ups, yeah there is texture. But I am the Chosen One 19:54, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 00:49, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry to break this, but I can't see the texture at all. Please define it a lot.

Re-Ups, darkened the texture. But I am the Chosen One 20:10, June 30, 2018 (UTC)

poke, its been a few since its been uploaded. But I am the Chosen One 20:13, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

As I just told you, you need to wait five days before asking for comments. Anyways, I still can't see the texture at all.

Re-Ups, its pretty dark as is now; hopefully its visible. But I am the Chosen One 02:01, July 4, 2018 (UTC)

Dotty (GC) - For Evaluation
I have no clue how to reserve images or even join... help? Like I added my name to the reservation table, but does that count. I tried Malina457 (talk) 01:54, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Soften the edges around the stripes. Define the shading depth. There is waste all around the image, please erase it. Good job on this! :) 03:53, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I see some foot waste, but other than that, I think I got it? Thanks btw :) Malina457 (talk) 04:47, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups Waste be gone, I think Malina457 (talk) 04:50, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

There is still some waste on the other edge of the image, left of the elbow on the front leg closest to us. Please smooth out the shading. 04:59, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I think I got the waste? It's being very elusive, and I tried with the shading Malina457 (talk) 05:32, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the shading on the tail, chest, and ---> front leg. Very nice! Waaaay better than my first image. 07:32, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

You still missed the waste. It’s in the same spot, plus behind the tail and behind the back leg. I can try to circle it in red and show you, if you need? 13:43, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Can you please circle it, I did try XD I will uploading soon Malina457 (talk) 13:46, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups I literally can't see the waste at all, anywhere, not in my program or on the wiki, it's being very elusive XD. Also thanks Vec :) Malina457 (talk) 14:08, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth out the tail shading, define the eye depth, and maybe add some shading along the top of the > ear since it looks slightly flat^^ gg for your first one

Reups Better? Malina457 (talk) 14:50, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth the shading everywhere. 22:04, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Malina457 (talk) 22:14, June 26, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I think the shading could be smoothed on the tail a little bit. Define the shading on the face too. 21:35, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Malina457 (talk) 23:23, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I’m sorry, but there is still waste. It’s everywhere, around the whole image. Some close to the lineart, some totally far away. Could you just erase everything outside of the lineart on the shading layers? I tried to make a redline for you but I couldn’t. Sorry to keep bringing it up, but there’s a ton there. 23:33, June 27, 2018 (UTC)

I can't see anything, can I get a second opinion as I've tried so hard to find it Malina457 (talk) 23:40, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Reups?? Malina457 (talk) 23:44, June 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The waste still there in several places, namely: under the tail, top of the tail, on the backside, and up onto the tail's < side, elbow and along the leg, between the legs and up along the chest to the chin, ear, and tail tip; hope this helps you find it.

I'll get right to it, thanks so much! Malina457 (talk) 01:55, June 28, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth the shading on the tail and legs. 01:59, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I cant really smooth the shading more there without it needing to be defined again Malina457 (talk) 02:12, June 28, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reups again Malina457 (talk) 02:23, June 28, 2018 (UTC)malina

Actually, I think it wouldn't hurt to smooth the shading on the hind leg and tail a little more; it still seems kind of hard-edged there and I don't think doing so would make the shading difficult to see. I also think you should expand the shading on the tail a bit. 00:15, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reups How's this? Malina457 (talk) 01:08, June 29, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth the shading on the flank. 03:10, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

reups I hate that flank shading Malina457 (talk) 03:16, June 29, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Maybe dull down the tail shading just a tiny bit? good job on your first charart. 19:01, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

reups ah thanks patch Malina457 (talk) 04:42, July 2, 2018 (UTC)malina

reups again Malina457 (talk) 05:40, July 3, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Marigold (GC) - For Approval
I officially dislike doing black cat chararts, but it’s whatever. :P This file is titled correctly, right? 21:34, June 28, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading and is that texture on it, if so could you lighten that a tad and smoothen it a tad? But I am the Chosen One 01:30, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Please expand the shading, as well.

06:11, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:43, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

Hazel Burrow (Ap) -CBA
I shaded this on a rigidty bus and I now just got some miserable wifi. Here's hoping this works. 07:13, June 30, 2018 (UTC)

Is the base that dark on her other image as well? Because I can't make out anything other than the white...

Reups Whoops! You're right. My b. 05:51, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the lower chest a little? 01:47, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 02:48, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Cinnamon (GC) - For Approval
00:45, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure which way the light is meant to be coming from? the back shading suggests < that way, but the shading on the tail and hind leg suggests the other way. 08:22, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Hunter Blanks - For Approval
I plan on resizing them but that's easier to do toward the end. I also want to edit the tail on the shorthaired blanks a bit. Ref for the pose can be found here. 17:01 Sun Jul 1 2018

can u make the longhair tail somewhat fluffier 19:08, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

Could you add whiskers? 00:30, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) (Q) - For Approval
new laptop means trying to find out what shading looks like. yes, there is quite a color difference between this and her old appearance and it does warrant the old images being moved.

i dunno if its just me but she looks a lil cross eyed 01:42, July 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think it's just how I had the eye coloring. Does this look better?

Fierce (GC) ~ For Approval
So I forgot to edit the paw, but I can fix that later.

Define the shading on the tail? 02:35, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-up Any tips on how to fix that paw would be greatly appreciated, as I cannot lineart.

Maybe curl the paw a little bit? Not as much as if her leg/wrist was twisted, but enough to round it off? Idk I'm sorry if this isn't easy to understand. I'll do a red line if you want 23:03 Tue Jul 3

A redline would be nice, thank you.

Unknown Resident Blanks - For Approval
I'll fix the paws and some anatomy soon. Just wanted to get these up. 18:42 Tue Jul 3

There’s waste outside the back paw on the short hair 23:25, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

Bee (Ki) ~ For Approval
I'm sure there's an effort in here, somewhere 22:47, July 3, 2018 (UTC)