Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 169

Lightningpaw (A) - Approved
All colors from the StarClan image.

Maybe add some more shading by the elbow on the tummy? 23:13, 3/21/2017

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the tail a bit? It's a little hard to see. 02:37, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

I have honestly tried a couple different times since you've asked, and because of where the white is on the tail, it's impossible for me to really define it without getting told ten million times to brighten the white.

Yeah imo it's visible. CBA?

Approved 14:47, 3/24/2017

Whorlpaw (K) - Approved
i'm much happier with the shading this time. ~Patch   feather~   21:34, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

Woah hes so adorable! it feels as if his eyes dont show pupils? but besides that he's perfectly fine!Wildthorn34 (talk) 23:38, March 21, 2017 (UTC)

I think it's just the eye color, honestly. It seems like there's pupils to me.. but then again this is such a small blank and you really don't have a lot of room to work with.

Define the shading on the ---> front leg just a tiny bit? 02:34, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''There is a pupil, just very tiny. ~Patch   feather~   12:55, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Nicely done :). CBA?

Approved 14:47, 3/24/2017