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Hunter Blanks - For Approval
I plan on resizing them but that's easier to do toward the end. I also want to edit the tail on the shorthaired blanks a bit. Ref for the pose can be found here. 17:01 Sun Jul 1 2018

can u make the longhair tail somewhat fluffier 19:08, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

Could you add whiskers? 00:30, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

You don't have much of a limit here, but I'm just going to bump this so you know that you do have at least two comments here. Not sure if you've seen them or not. (  05:07, 7/07/2018  ) ​

Add more fluff to the longhairs shoulders and neck?

20:23, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Resized and added floof+whiskers. 1:52 Tue Jul 10 2018

Idk if this is nitpicky or not, but could you have the whiskers connect to the face? :) These are very good, though, Raelic. 01:59, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

maybe a little fluff on the neck/chest area thats showing of the longhair? 20:21, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

Wouldn't the whiskers also be on the side facing us? 06:13, July 11, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry! Thought I'd have more time this weekend after moving but my fiance has the laptop. I'll try to get these re-uploaded Thursday but I'm getting married this weekend so it might be Monday v or Tuesday.

Do you mean not having the whiskers forward, Icy? 2:40 Tue Jul 17 2018

Yeah, I think I mean flipping them around. (If that makes any sense.) 10:32, July 17, 2018 (UTC)

jw if these are gonna be resized a bit more to be a bit smaller? they still seem a little too large. if you're going to anyway, just ignore my comment lol 23:45, July 20, 2018 (UTC)

Just to add on, in order to not appear distorted/blurry within the template, they do need to be a bit smaller. See? With the blanks this size, they appear blurry and ruin the quality. (  22:30, 7/21/2018  ) ​

Are you still working, Raelic? I don’t think there’s a time limit, but I’ll check in anyways. :) 03:15, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

Unknown Resident Blanks - For Approval
I'll fix the paws and some anatomy soon. Just wanted to get these up. 18:42 Tue Jul 3

There’s waste outside the back paw on the short hair 23:25, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed some things that were bothering me. I may need to tweak the pose a little bit but for now I like these. 20:37 Fri Jul 6

I think the front legs should be slimmer? Not entirely sure, though. 21:45, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

I feel like we'd be able to see the cats thigh bent somewhat more? and the front half of the body seems a bit thicker in comparison to the back, which seems a bit thin if you get what I mean? the front leg closest to us also seems a bit too thick in comparison to the rest of the legs. 01:31, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the lineart of the back leg closest to us double-pixels? Just in that one spot it isn’t, on both images. 21:09, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Still working, Sun? I know there’s not much of a limit for blanks, but.. . 05:40, July 12, 2018 (UTC)

I am. I've just had some problems with my tablet. I'll upload later today ^^; 11:20 Thu Jul 12

Reuploaded I'm working on that rump area, bear with me there 15:10 Fri Jul 13

Reuploaded If anyone can give me a red line to reference in fixing the proportion issue in the rump, it would be very appreciated ^^' 17:03 Fri Jul 13

Reuploaded 17:09 Fri Jul 13

I think there's some white waste along the ---> hind leg? Lovely images! :D 05:32, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Could you curve the back some more? Also I'm not too sure about this, but I think the belly should be lower than the chest at this angle? 15:57, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

By any chance, could you make the head higher so it aligns with the back or is maybe even a bit taller? 10:32, July 17, 2018 (UTC)

I'll try to. I'm going to be driving back North today, so I'll upload the version I have and then try messing with the head. <span style="">13:31 Tue Jul 17

Reuploaded Redid the tail on the longhair to define the stomach line as well. <span style="">18:18 Thu Jul 19

I (think) with how cats walk, the hind leg furtherest away from us would also be moving forward with the front leg thats in the air? like with that if you get what I mean. that's if it's walking and doesn't like, just have a paw in the air. otherwise maybe.....pmove the head over a wee bit, it seems like the neck is too short, and maybe thin out the front leg some more?. 23:48, July 20, 2018 (UTC)

There's no real limit for these, Sun, but I'm just gonna bump this to let you know you have a comment in case you haven't seen it. =)  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">05:56, 7/26/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

I believe the anatomy on the face connected to the neck is incorrect... should it be "bent" that way, for lack of better terminology? 13:45, July 26, 2018 (UTC)

I'm reworking these from the ground up. It will be a few days, but I'm going to be tweaking the pose and stuff. So that's the plan for these... <span style="">20:15 Thu Jul 26

https://goo.gl/images/YGpqob This is what I'm changing it to. I'll working on it once I'm back at the house and get it posted hopefully today. <span style="">14:47 Fri Jul 27

Reuploaded I am going to fix the lack of the white layer asap <span style="">17:29 Fri Jul 27

These'll need to be just a little bit smaller, so it doesn't get distorted when it's displayed in the infobox. it'll shrink the blank by default, but I'd rather prevent this from happening in general to allow for no distortion of anyone's images. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">17:09, 7/28/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

Can you make the blanks skinnier? The cats seem too big, even on the long haired. 17:12, July 28, 2018 (UTC)

i think the back shouldn't rise that high and should be more straight, unless they're doing the wiggly butt thing that is. 19:58, July 29, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lowered the back a tad, while still trying to keep the pose. <span style="">00:17 Mon Jul 30

the belly (more on the <-- side) is really big, like sticks out a lot. thin him out some more? --

The legs are reaallyy thick. Maybe thin them out too? :) 03:13, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

Dovewing (GC) - For Approval
#itried, I'll redo the shading later as I'm not very happy with it. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 12:52, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

While you do, define the shading everywhere, I can hardly even see it. 13:30, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the earpink as well.

Define the belly's pale parts^^ 21:27, July 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, did a different shading for the body and did my best to match the pale parts to her other images. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 15:42, July 15, 2018 (UTC)

Looks good so far. Your light source is confusing, but a simple way to fix that is to swap the front leg shading. Also, try and avoid leaking shading on the back legs (basically it's leaking into the stomach if you get me) Speaking of which, I think there should be shading on the stomach of some sort.

Smooth out the shading. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">18:00, 7/15/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​ <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">18:00, 7/15/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

Define the pale on the belly. <span style="">20:51 Sun Jul 15

Re-Ups, I defined the chest some but as far as I saw on the other images, the pale parts didn't reach the stomach. I also added more shading on the stomach. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 13:31, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

I'm quite sure the other images have pale covering the belly - per the kit image (which was first), and it's quite visible on the loner. The other images have shading over it, hence it being not as visible, but it's there. 13:42, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I added the stomach paler parts. Its not very bright as that's where shading is. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 14:12, July 16, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more toward the top of the hindleg and shoulder. Define the light on the front legs.

14:26, July 16, 2018 (UTC) Try a stronger blur tool (check hard edged if you're using GIMP). The shading should be smoothed out everywhere except for the legs, imo

Re-Ups, I defined the light on the legs and smoothed the haunch and belly shading since those do meet. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 10:28, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just my screen, but the shading seems to be leaking in a couple spots, specifically near the base of the tail and in the corners of the underbelly. I know there are pale parts there, but the shading still shouldn't be coming away from the lineart. 11:54, July 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I tried to fix it, hopefully I got it. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 20:23, July 19, 2018 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be smoothed out, and the way it is shaded on the paws makes it seem like she has two darker legs, so define the light source there. 13:13, July 21, 2018 (UTC)

To add to Icy's comment, try removing (on the front legs) the < shading to define your light source. Also, remove some of the shading on the shoulder and move it ---> towards the shoulder lineart. And add some on the chest fluffh. Here's a red and blue line to help ya. Red is where your shading should generally be and blue is where it should not. It'll help ya with your light source. :D These blanks can be difficult to shade so don't fret about it. 04:53, July 24, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 19:26, July 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the front legs.

20:07, July 25, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 21:57, July 25, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 05:16, July 31, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry, but I believe the overall shading can be smoothed out a fair bit more. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#000000; font-size:85%">10:40, 7/31/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#0c28cf 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#000000; font-size:86%">) ​

This would benefit from adding shading depth to the stomach as well

Re-ups, #itriedagain <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 11:50, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

what I suggest about the stomach shading is to add a new layer and add more shading there. Right now it looks flat. Also, the shading on the front legs (upper portion if you get what i mean) can be smoothed out

Crowfrost (kit) - for approval
My second gross charart which will most likely be declined oh well

Red (talk) 06:57, July 31, 2018 (UTC)

I'm fairly sure Crowfrost wouldn't get a kit image due to his name being unknown as a kit. <span style="color:#0F4B13; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #569B5B; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:8px;">But I am the Chosen One 08:38, July 31, 2018 (UTC)

nah, some characters with unknown kit names have been given art. I think characters with confirmed siblings/mothers have kit images regardless if they had a name or w/e (iirc, the reasoning is "they can't have a mother or siblings if they haven't been a kit" or something) but Crowfrost doesn't have any family listed other than his kids, so it doesn't apply to him. -

I'll assume the cite is valid (if it is mentioned that he went through childhood the name would be listed as unknown, since we can't assume anything). And as comments go:


 * 1) It seems like you aren't using layers, which is the reason why the colors leak past the linear art. Don't know what I mean? Check out the tutorials. I'd also like to ask which program you're using to do this. I highly recommend GIMP since it's free and easy to use, but if you already have the program photoshop is also excellent.
 * 2) You need to fill in the pupils and the eye color shouldn't leak out of the linear art. Again, check out the tutorials. I recommend using the pencil tool to fill in the eyes.
 * 3) You need to add shading. Simple blurred shading is fine. There are plenty of tutorials out there that are very helpful.

Blur or smudge the ear pink a bit. 03:09, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Crowfrost says 'before I was born' in some quote or something. And also, I use Medibang paint pro, so IDK whether there are any tutorials for that program. I think I'll use GIMP from now on. Can anyone send me a link? And also, I'm like a beginner in PCA, which is why I'm kinda bad ;-;. Thanks for the tips!

Red (talk) 06:02, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

GIMP's official website is here: https://www.gimp.org if you aren't comfortable with random external links just look it up on Google and you'll find it.

All tutorials can be found here, but there are a lot of them!

For this image specifically, I recommend this tutorial on dual colored cats, this tutorial on shading and solid cats and you can also check out my tutorial about shading in general, which is very specific to GIMP. Unfortunately I do not think there're any tutorials for Medibang paint pro on this site.

Thanks! Red (talk) 09:13, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (Star) ~ For Approval
The Erins Ctrl Z this guy 04:18, August 2, 2018 (UTC)

lol true. Could you break up the stripes more, as they appear on the GC image?