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Dawncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
Boom. All colors colorpicked from the elder that Jayie has for approval. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:06, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on her belly a bit (I know it's artist's choice but it seems a little too dark), and I don't think her stripes really match the other images, but that might just be me 20:04, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I can't do anything with the stripes. I copied from the elder best I could. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:26, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

It could just be me, but the base coat looks a little light. 10:21 PM, Tue Jul 29, 2014

I think it's because of the highlights. Maybe dull them some? Wow... *o* 22:26 Tue Jul 29

the stripes don't match, possible add more. 01:07, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too thin, and there should be striping on the head. I think the highlighting might be a little too bright as well compared to the other Dawncloud images, but that might be up to artist preference, not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:10, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled the highlights, thickened the stripes, and lightened the face shading so you could see the face stripes. I matched the stripes the best I could, and spent about two hours on them. I even pasted the Elder on another layer to use as reference. Queens' bellies are stretched, so so is the pattern, to be fair. (And Duck, adding more stripes probably won't make it match more, because she never had more stripes then this in the first place) Pls don't kill me  Shinxy  Blitz  and  Melody  09:08, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Does she have texture, or is that just the way you've done the shading? 11:35, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

It's shading. I smudged rather then blurred. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:05, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, if you look at her StarClanner, she does have more stripes than this facing this way, adding more, would make it match more. 17:47, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. OK, Shinx confirmed for derp. Added some more stripes, although I don't have room for any more. If someone complains, I'll just redo them. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:37, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit its desaturating her colors. 22:45 Wed Jul 30 2014

There's waste under the belly and on the front leg farthest to us. Brick  09:33, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:58, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 19:11, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a teeny bit. This is lovely. *.*

Re-uploaded Thank you! Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

make the stripes more pixel-y 18:31, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

I'm afraid I can't, I tried. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:53, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

You can't unblur them?

Sunfish (Q) - For Approval
fish fish fish fish fish >(,·) 17:24, July 30, 2014 (UTC)\

dull the earpink a bit? fish fish fishy fish fish 6:10 PM, Wed Jul 30, 2014

>)))),·) 19:19, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The leg shading is a bit flat... Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:38, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

><((("> 23:06, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out her leg and chest shading, and define the light on her legs 13:25, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

<º)))>< 21:08, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the depth in the belly shading. Teldy x fish

Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
let's see if I can get this approved by august 7th (holiday c:)! Comments? Changes are here 23:38, August 1, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reups changes 13:07, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading looks blotchy on some areas of the belly and hind leg that's lifted. 23:32 Sun Aug 3

Reups 00:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit?

Reups change I also darkened it a bit 21:41, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Wind (Q) ~ For Approval
ehhh, comments? 02:24, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Very nice shading on the face. :) Maybe have a bit more shadow on the >>>> side of her belly, and have some highlight on her chest. This looks really good. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:40, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

The chest wouldn't have any light hitting it at this position, so I think it's fine, as well as the belly, since it's trying to make the belly look round and all o3o 17:05, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

thin out the cheekbone shadow, unless she has some really really defined cheekbones it wouldn't be that big 19:13, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

She could have some really defined ones or not - why should we assume? I think it's fine because of said reason. (ahh i hope this doesn't come off as laziness because it's not) 19:15, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think it would hurt to do what Duck suggested. I saw it at first and thought it was unblurred/unsmudged shading. And it kinda is coming off as laziness, dear. =P

re-up 20:50, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

make the earpink more visible in -> ear please? Nice job. <span style="">12:17 AM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

Smooth out the main body shading just a bit more.

re-up 23:39, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Oakfur (Alt. A) - CBA
bleh… 20:45, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I can't tall where the light source is. The head, tail, and three of the legs suggest it's from the back, the chest and front leg furthest from us suggest from the front, and the back suggests from the top? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody

Re-uploaded Jet-lagged Scar really shouldn't be shading cats… 17:29, August 3, 2014 (UTC)


 * They are 21:49, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think changes are showing...??? <span style="">17:26 Mon Aug 4

Sorry but when I compare both images they look the same. (To me, anyway... It could just be that wikia is being a butt). <span style="">21:52 Mon Aug 4

Maybe upload the changes to iaza? I kinda can't tell either, and it's been a good couple days.


 * changes 21:00, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Scarly deserves a CBA for another lovely image~

Pikepaw (MO) (Ki) - For Approval
Pulled all colors and opacities from the apprentice. comments? 17:10, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws. He's cute! <span style="">21:20 Sun Aug 3

Re-uploaded Thanks~ c: 21:57, August 3, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? I'm having a hard time seeing it. cuteeeee!! <span style="">12:15 AM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

The shading on the tail suggest the light is coming from a different way than the body shading. On the body the light comes from the left but on the tail the light comes from the right. Brick  19:17, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading just a little bit.

re-uploaded however, I didn't change my lightsource because I've used this for years on all of my kits 18:34, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

Thorn (Alt. Ro 2) ~ For Approval
She was described with Dew's description and gender, and according the the characters needing art page, that warrants an alt? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  11:55, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

I believe the file should be named Thorn.rogue.alt2.png. Also, some of the bits of fur sticking up going along the spine, the lines on them look a little bit thinner than they should, could you just add a few pixels to them so they match the rest of the lines? Brick 14:35, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Would you like Dew's lineart? You may use it if you wish. <span style="">17:24 Mon Aug 4

Yes please, Hawkie. ^_^ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  19:17, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Here you go! <span style="">20:16 Mon Aug 4

TY, I'll re-upload ASAP. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  20:57, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  00:19, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

The file's still named incorrectly, it should be Thorn.rogue.alt2.png. Brick  11:26, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

I know that, however I have no ability to change it. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  18:00, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah you can, just re-upload it to File:Thorn.rouge.alt2.png <span style="">6:11 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

That'd leave this file just floating around, being SPAM. I'd rather wait and ask someone to please rename it? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  18:23, August 6, 2014 (UTC)


 * you'd just mark the file for deletion. But anyway works I suppose... <span style="">6:25 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

Thank you for not wanting to create more images for deletion, Shinx. I've renamed the file for you. =)

Thank you! <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit.

I'm not sure if it was intentional, but there appears to be a patch of... Blue on the face/neck. Brick  22:53, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

It's the shading tint, I assume? <span style="">23:16 Wed Aug 6

Re-upped It's a tint, I tried toning it down some. And I smudge my shading, not blur it, but I smudged it a bit more. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  00:07, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

Dew (Alt Ro) - For Approval
Figured I'd try a rogue blank. Dew was described with Thorn's description at one point, so that warranted an alt. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:29, August 5, 2014 (UTC)

If I remember correctly, Dew was also described as female here, so this should be the female blank. Also, maybe define the tail shading a bit? I wish I was this good. 16:32, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changed the blank, lightened the eyes a bit, defined the tail shading, and tweaked the ear shading. And thanks. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:27, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Here's the changes in case they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140807C/ezimba13931897993700.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:28, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading just a bit?

Does this work? Here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140807C/ezimba13931841642100.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:42, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Star) - For Approval
Rumble rumble Brick  12:57, August 5, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? 13:53, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2hrel4m.png, rumble rumble Brick  19:15, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the highlights, and define the shading a bit more.

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/3305kbr.png Rumble rumble rumble Brick   18:44, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

Duskfur (Q) - For Approval
Changes are here.

define the belly, tail, and chest shading a tick? <span style="">11:27 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading since I didn't like the first one and shading this isn't as easy as it looks.

Try making the stripes curve some more. 01:41, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

They don't curve at all on the warrior. If I made them curve, I think it would divert from the original pattern. Pregnant or not, I don't want to teeter too far away from the pattern Twee made, and they don't curve very much on the original queen image or warrior (I was trying to match the warrior and queen both tbh), so unless someone else agrees, I'd really rather not change it.

Yes, but just because of the perspective, I think they should bend like (((( a bit, because if she's coming towards you the stripes would bend that way, as would the belly. It's less about the pregnancy and more about the perspective. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:48, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Perspective over pattern. Makes sense. Re-uploaded. Changes.

Wrenflight (Q) ~ For Approval
Hawky thinks she did a good job. <span style="">23:26 Thu Aug 7

Blur the tail shading a tad. Brick thinks Hawky did a good job. Brick  13:44, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

I smudged the shading so I'd rather not. Thank you, though. <span style="">18:24 Sat Aug 9

Red (SD) (Ki) ~ For Approval
02:37, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink. I want this plz Imma steal it from you.

Bumble (Lo) ~ For Approval
Um, did she still have a collar when she became loner? I didn't read the book.

She didn't have one that I can recall, but since I'm not sure, I think you should probably put one on her just in case.

Frost (StarClan) - For Evaluation
Did I do a good job? Tigerbird-The-Great 16:59, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, needs a texture, and the image isn't the right size. For the texture, I recommend asking David, the artist of Frost's rogue image, how he made his.

On Frost's page, It says he's thick furred. Tigerbird-The-Great 17:11, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thick fur does not mean long-haired. I have thicker hair, but it wasn't always as long as it is. I used to have it fairly shorter when I was younger, and it was pretty dang thick. The thickness refers to the density of the fur, not the length. Plus, you have an an image to match, and David uses the short-furred blank.

Define and darken the shading a tick, and blur the earpink. Very nice job on this. If it helps, for thick furred cats, to make the shading look less flat, I do two layers of dark blue shading, instead of black. <span style="">5:43 PM, Sat Aug 9, 2014