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Mist (KP) Kittypet ~ For Approval
Welp. I tried... 02:13, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged the collor. 02:49, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the foreleg, and blur/smudge the transitions between the colors on the collar if you can. It still looks a bit hard-edged. 02:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-upSmudged it more and did some stuff :P 03:10, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

The color needs to match his other images, so it has to be lighter. 14:57, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Add some more light on the tail and add some shading to the collar. 21:45 Sat Mar 7

Tiger, Mist has no other Kittypet images. So I don't know the original collar colour. 21:34, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, I mean the body color, not the collar. It needs to match the loner and kit images, so it needs to be a lighter shade of gray. I suggest to colorpick it. 21:44, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I'll brighten up the collar later. Couldn't change collar colour because I don't know what it originally was :/. (I'll clear the waste in the next upload) 22:05, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 2nd try... 22:17, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Since apparently I needed to move the files, this has now been renamed to Mist (KP).kittypet.png.

Lighten him up more, hes still quite dark as he is now. 01:02, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 05:00, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up the shading as well 18:01 Mon Mar 9

re-up Any better? I lightened up his fur colour from the kit image. 22:47, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

The shading makes it look like he has a dark stripe down his back, kinda like Graystripe.

How do I change it? Do I lighten it up, Smudge, blur... 23:19, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I hit publish without reading over my comment. x.x Yes, lightening it should probably do the trick.

re-up Lightened the shading. 23:31, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and light on the tail and define the light on the foreleg? 19:18, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up Boop 18:13, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Give the shading a little bit more blur, and also delete some waste around his right back knee, it’s just sudden shading that I don’t think belongs there. 07:31, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Ancient) ~ Withdrawn
Let's bring her back with a redone pattern 11:47, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 22:44, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did other stuff too 06:40, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 11:00, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:35, March 8, 2015 (UTC)

Poke (I think it's been three days, or am I going nuts because it's 10:00 PM?) 13:43, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the little 4-5 pixel gap on < that elbow hole rectangle thing. 16:05, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

The colors don't seem like they match all the way... idk if you have it, but the base should be #BEA58A and the flecks are #5F3220 on multiply on a lower opacity. Shading is a darker brown, almost black, so shouldn't make much of a difference.

Re-uploaded Eww 08:42, March 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define, and give the body shading a bit more of a shape to it. I can tell it's there, but it doesn't seem to have all that much shape to it, and it fades in certain places, blends in with the darker flecks in another....and this is sounding horribly offensive, Fox. I apologize. x.x I need to learn how to Word Better.

No, that wasn't offensive at all I'm withdrawing because this is actually bugging me. Feel free to pick this lovely lady up if you don't have anyone. 07:18, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. Q) - CBA
phew... it's been a long time since I've done this... She was described with having white patches in Dovewing's Silence. We've done alts for a change in stripe color, so I see no reason not to do one for a change in patch color. Comments? 02:35, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

I don't really think so. It doesn't describe her having different colours... 02:40, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Well, white patches implies a ginger base, and ginger patches implies a white base. I think it's a zebra-style moment, but Darkstripe got the same treatment.

I think it counts, since she was clearly described with ginger patches, not white. Anyway, define the shading everywhere. 02:49, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:04, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs? So pretty :3 07:58, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:27, March 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the scar a bit. 12:39, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

The Scar is fine. Define the shading on the stomach though. 16:03, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:42, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 07:15, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt MCA) ~ For Approval
Feels weird to be posting this so soon. Anyway, credits to Foxy for finding the cite, she was called pale so... Comments? I'm super proud of this. 04:59, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Was she called pale or pale gray? if it was pale grey then you'd have to remove the stripes 10:08, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

She was called pale, not pale gray. 10:42, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

While we're at it, can you make her eyes dark blue? Just fits with the trivia. 21:45, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

*steals* This is way too pretty! Define the shading on the...neck/chin? Not sure if you have to just a suggestion. 03:56, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I liked her with green eyes ;_______________________________________; Added some depth. 08:14, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

she has a kit alt for being called pale grey and that doesnt have stripes? 21:03 Thu Mar 12

I already said above, she was called pale, not pale grey. 00:02, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Looks fluffy! Should she have nose pink? -- ☾ Sunstream  ❄ Watching the Snow Fall 02:48, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

No, it's not essential. 04:56, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

what are you talking about? these blanks specifically have space for nosepink and it should be filled in. 13:22, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Okay I always seen cats with noses that aren't pink and I didn't add it for a bunch of my images but okay. 14:42, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

its not that it has to be pink it just has to be filled in. 14:44, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Makes the eyes a darker shade of blue please. I love what you've done! 07:31, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I think it's fine. They are dark enough to me. But thank you~ 07:48, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

Does the cite say she has blue eyes on the same page (or near it) that she's called pale? Because if not, I really think you should stick with her cited eye color- which is green.

Icicle (ki) ~ for approval
only rainbows, after rain//the sun will always, come again//and it's a circle, circling//around again, around again - okay so here's take two 21:38, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Return of the cursed image! Define the earpink on the right (our left) ear? Lovely image, as always, Beebs. 12:38, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

wouldn't the light on the tail be flipped because the light is coming from over <== not over ==> 14:52 Wed Mar 11

also, lighten up his li'l blue eyes they look almost black 14:52 Wed Mar 11

I see them fine, tbh 15:58, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

I agree they're too dark. 15:59, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten up his facial shading a bit?

re-up thought some things were fine like the tail light source 20:35, March 11, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and define the shading depth on the face. 07:51, March 13, 2015 (UTC)

Tail shading is fine, imo. 19:52 Fri Mar 13

Define the leg shading for me Beebs, this is very purrty. 01:03, March 14, 2015 (UTC)

There is a really dark line of shading on his left side of his body, can you lighten it a tad? Very good! 07:31, March 14, 2015 (UTC)