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Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie  Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade  Crystie  Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Reuploaded. I like the eye color of the apprentice pic more oof :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  13:19, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

What are the lighter blotches on her? Are those highlights? If so, tone them down (on the opacity bar). Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The pupils appear to be inconsistent in color- one eye has a darker black than the other. Shading is still leaking in some places. Don't worry! I struggle with that as well. Fill those blank areas with shading- I can provide a redline if you want. Smooth out the shading everywhere- just smooth out the edges with the blur or smudge tool, Gaussian Blur makes shading leak away, only use it if you want a really good shading gradient. You have unfilled pixels on > this side of the tail. Sorry for the wall of text! You're doing good so far! 22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Potato! <3 And thank you so much for the redline if you can provide!!! I feel so foolish… <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Here. Red= fill in/add shading. Blue= Remove shading to fit your light source. Green=Waste. Delete that. Yellow= missing/light pixels. Magenta= blur/smudge and tone down the highlights. Hope this helps! (if I mess up on the source sorry if I do). 22:31, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Aww thank you Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  03:40, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm it doesn't appear you did what I said. Did you reupload the right file? The only difference I see is that the highlight blotches are set to a higher opacity.. I meant to lower them, then blur/smudge. If you need any more help, let me know! 03:51, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof... maybe it's the .mpd file, I guess? :P Anyway :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

What is that on her belly? If that's shading depth you need to lighten it and blur/smudge it. Lighten the highlight spots on her legs more and then blur/smudge them. Smooth out the shading and make >> this pupil darker to match <<this pupil. Let me know if you need to elaborate! 13:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! :D School's so busy these days :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:46, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of brown in her eye and smooth the shading on her face.

Highlights are making her turn gray in some areas- if you haven't set them to overlay, you should as I think that should help. 01:35, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail please. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:08, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 0px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:47, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

The tips of her front paws are missing some color and her bottom is too. Her forehead has a dark smudge, I don't know if it's shading or part of her or a mistake.

17:15, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

It's shading :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  06:54, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

There's Gray littered about her, smooth shading on stomach, shoulder and on her forehead. Her set looks like it has a faint, paintbrushy texture. This also looks like it might be a bit of a different color than her set. This looks even sort of red. The texture is most notable on the warrior and can be found on File:Sorrelstripe.warrior.png <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:11, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes appear to be two seperate colors, one is more brownish than the other (>>> this one). 17:37, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh it's the first now! :O Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  12:58, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

The base is inconsistent on the tail, and the texture looks green. Draw 1-2px lines and smudge them in the direction of the fur. 13:01, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the backlegs should be smoothed

12:38, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  12:07, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture. 22:05, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail and darken it only a little bit.

01:31, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:37, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

define the texture a bit more? i still cant see it.

04:00, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think you should check for leaking shading, I see it in a lot of places. If you need a redline, just ask! 01:51, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh Potato please give me one :P <3 <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  11:53, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Here. 13:38, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  14:15, May 13, 2019 (UTC)

i'm sorry but what are those black specks around the art?

10:45, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

This looks much darkee than the apprentice, maybe recede some of the shsding and lighten the base a tad? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:47, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

The specks are texture I think. They need some smudging, just like shading. The base is really inconsistent (not sure if this repeats Mink's comment, sorry if it does)  22:13, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

Small tabby kit (Ki)- For Approval
Comments? 21:33, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste at the tip of the ear closest to us. And if you can, smooth out the tabby stripes.

21:43, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the forelegs. If you're going for a pointed tabby look, I'd add more stripes to the face and lessen them a bit on the hip 21:53, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded baby kitty  22:11, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, I cant see it at all <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:50, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:15, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a change? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:52, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the change, the shading is much more defined. could you smooth it out on the head and the shoulder area? and perhaps expand it more on the tail? i love the stripes!

Could you darken the shading more? The tint itself is a bit too light (That's most likely the issue) perhaps darken the tint to a much darker purple. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:57, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:56, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and ears? 13:43, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:02, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I like this and it's nice to see you improve :) 01:41, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but could you add/define the facial shading and fix the leaking on the leg? and smooth out the shading everywhere

There's also waste in front of the muzzle. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  10:57, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:44, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

There is still some waste outside the muzzle. Could you taper the end of the large stripe on the haunch? 23:51, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded volcano stripeee ftw  00:03, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you connect the mid-section shading to the lineart of the tail and haunch? <span style="">02:54 Sun May 12

I'm basing this off of Baykit's source, and the shading there isn't connected the way you are telling me to. 03:00, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

yeah but it looks like a halo of light is coming off from the tip of the tail. I understand the light source, but to me it looks like leaking shading. another opinion would be cool <span style="">03:35 Sun May 12

Uh, your tail has leaking shading on the top. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:53, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Please give me a redline, Splook. I'm still very confused as to what you're talking about. 13:41, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

i'm talking about this area. the shading bordering the tail lineart is lighter, which gives off the 'halo of light' that i was referring to. just filling it in would fix it <span style="">02:44 Tue May 14

Reuploaded mke weird halo thing should be gone now. Thanks Splook! 22:18, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

There's still shading leaking at the end of the tail. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:57, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded there was very little, so I think defining the light on the tail did it. No more weird strange halo thing. 22:19, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded smoothed shading on the tail more and fixed a stripe that looked like a cat chewed part of it off XD  22:09, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Bird (E) ~ For Approval
23:03, 5/4/19

Wow! This is amazing! Can you desaturate the earpink? It's really bright and neon. 23:24, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you! 23:48, 5/4/19

This is really good. Could you make the booty stripes lessen, her other images (File:Bird.loner.png) don't seem to have much there. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:55, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you define shading depth on the head just a tad?

reuploaded 14:37, 5/5/19

I'm gonna bump ya up to an apprentice, since you clearly know what you're doing. ^^ You can use "for approval" from now on. 00:19, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Terribly sorry for breaking the CBA, but is there any way you could possibly dull the highlights or reduce the "shiny" bits? It's throwing off the coloring and making it look a tad lighter than her rogue and original CG style, both of whom bear the master pattern due to their creator having designed it. ​

reuploaded hopefully the change is noticeable enough, let me know if i should fix it again. 21:36, 5/7/19

I'm not seeing any changes in the file history. It's probably a glitch with Wikia, but could you reupload again and see what it does? ​

reuploaded changes are here if they still aren't showing up. 18:50, 5/8/19

Could you dull the highlights a bit more? Still looks lighter than the other images imo 15:05, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? I'm not sure you were aware there was another comment on this.

Do you want the file for the loner? I believe I have it on a flash drive. Its not the first in the set (I believe) but the colors came from previous images. <span style="">13:27 Wed May 15

OS-3 elder 1 ~ For Evaluation
my first PCA image, I'm still learning Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:29, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

You need to have the heading be OS-3 elder 1- For Evaluation, since you are a kit in the project at the moment. Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink showing. 16:36, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for double commenting, but can you remove the waste around the elder? What I do is I use the lasso tool on the program I use and circle everywhere where there's darkness and hit delete. You can also use the magic wand tool, go to your transparent layer, select outside of the lineart, and go back to your base/shading layers and hit delete. 16:53, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded!Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:59, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink could use a lot of blurring/smudging at the edges. Define the shading on the face and ears, and define the shading depth. To do that, add a thinner, darker layer of shading. Can you give some variation to the stripes so they're not just facing the same direction and have the same width? Lastly, the stripes on the neck and back border on being a triangle tabby- a pattern that was ruled out for being unrealistic. I'd reccomend to make them more like the other stripes. If you need me to elaborate, let me know! 17:35, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The back/neck stripes look fine, but the one stripe on the shoulder connecting to the head does look out of place. I can redline if need be. Also the shading needs to be defined everywhere. r hearts  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <22:57, 5/05/2019> ​

this needs to be short-furred since they're windclan

Moonyy might be wrong and right. Thistleheart was WindClan and she had long fur. Can you darken the shading a tad?

windclan cats have to be short-furred unless specified otherwise, Thistlehesrt was specified to be long haired 16:25, May 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

You still have some time left, but are you still working? 15:08, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Darken the shading everywhere more.. 16:14, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

You forgot to sign your comment. Crop the image a tad? There's a tad too much space on << this side. -- 17:13, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink in the ear closest to us should cover more of the ear as well. -- 01:52, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the belly shading some and connect it to the bottom lineart. <span style="">02:54 Sun May 12

Still working?

Tornear (Elder) - For Approval
I know this is rushed but wanted to get this up before my exams start. I'll darken the stripes and tweak the shading next upload. 16:20, May 13, 2019 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear. 16:49, May 13, 2019 (UTC)

There needs to be lots more stripes and they need to be thinned a tad as well. 21:50, May 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Can't believe I forgot TornEAR's ear lol 19:34, May 14, 2019 (UTC)

Nice job on the stripes, I know matching a Mounty image is no easy task. Could you possibly soften the stripes just a bit, though? They seem a bit softer when you compare it to his older elder image. ​​​​​​

Re-uploaded - I tried softening the stripes, hopefully this is better. 16:25, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Changed shading and his eyes. 15:33, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on his head, chest, and forelegs? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:39, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Added depth to his face, and darkened it overall. 10:32, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading, please define it. 14:52, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Messed around with the shading. I might change it completely though. 15:22, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Badgerfang (Alt. K) - For Approval
05:52, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes a bit paler as with the gray, the gray on the apprentice seems a lot softer and scattered if that makes sense. Also could you possibly define the shading on the white? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:08, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:44, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Storkkit (Ki) - CBA
I freakin love tortoiseshells, they're so pretty and so fun to draw. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:34, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Removed a bunch of waste - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:58, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

Dull the shading tint some? Malina457 (talk) 20:59, May 15, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded Dulled it just a bit. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:12, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:53, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Poolcloud (E) ~ CBA
sorry this is so skody please bear with me as I get reused to my laptop's trackpad 21:08, May 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:53, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Troutclaw (E) - CBA
00:50, May 16, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I feel like his stripes are more ragged and bluer in color in his other image. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:03, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:32, May 16, 2019 (UTC)tybaxel

CBA? 16:55, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Cricketkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 02:21, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

This is cute, this is totally optional but possibly smooth the texture? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:14, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shoulder shading and the butt shading just a wee bit 19:23, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:50, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Rubblekit (K) - CBA


This is a cutie. CBA? 16:55, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (E) ~ For approval
i have to confess i still don't know how to actually copy this pattern 21:04, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (E) - Withdrawn
First time trying textured shading in general, and black shading since I've been back. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:19, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

David says they still want this. I said when I added the remaining images to check for an OA claim before reserving it. ​​

I did check, they must have added it afterward. Sorry. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:18, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

if u want any of them im not gonna do featherstorm clovertail or starlingfeather 23:23, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for letting me know! Sorry for the hassle David and Jayce, I actually mistook this charart for another and didn't actually check the claims, I've been so used to the elders being up for grabs because of the past few months that I didn't even see the OA claims message along the top. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:29, May 16, 2019 (UTC)

I guess I should withdraw this then. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:26, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Macgyver (KP) - For Approval
An attempt was made. Colors from kittypet to the best of my ability (without file) 01:25, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. 01:44, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:39, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, you can see the shading well enough. Nothing needs to be super dark, this is fine as is - but Potato’s comment is still applicable.

I can't see the shading at all, it wouldn't hurt to define it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:10, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Going to work on smoothing the shading depth on the belly, but I darkened all my shading layers so hopefully everything is more visible now. 14:41, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. 14:44, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

The patches seems just a tad sharper on the og kittypet and warrior. 17:45, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. An attempt was made. 19:15, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Other paler pelts (star) ~ For Approval
tried out blurred shading but will probably end up smudging it to smooth it out. just wanted to get it up before i get swamped in homework

reups ended up smudging the shading

Define the shading depth a little?

14:52, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if this is required, but could you smudge the shading in the direction of your texture? 15:25, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups tried my best with the smudging, but the source made me confused lol. i smudged my other star the same way though?

Add some light to the ears? 16:51, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Chestnutkit (K) ~ For Approval
I'm paranoid that I'm gonna misspell Chestnut. 17:23, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomkit (OT) (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay, here she is; I might tweak the stripes <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:18, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

There seems to be an uncolored bit on the tail, on the part of the tail farthest to the right - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:37, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, oops I guess my brush didn't fill that part in. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:56, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Tom (KP) - For Approval
This was incredibly fun to make  19:00, May 17, 2019 (UTC)

Dang, well done in matching his other images. o.o That's no easy feat. Could you possibly define the shading? Moreso on the tail and limbs. ​​​

reup  02:39, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a line of texture right up next to the back lineart? There's just an out of place gap there. 16:55, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Featherstorm (E) - For Approval
matched to the old elder cos it was first in the set?

Clovertail (E) - For Approval
wasn't sure if i needed to extend the white up the shoulder any more, so feel free to let me know your opinions <span style="">02:28 Sat May 18

It should be fine, it matches the others. Could you smooth that shoulder shading and thicken it just a tad. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:50, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Lavenderkit (K) - For Approval
couldnt load the tree so idk what it looks like on there. if this looks 3000 off can someone screenshot it for me id appreciate it 03:16, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

The description is a silver cat with lighter spots. The base needs to be turned to silver, and you have waste under those feetsies ;)  03:18, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

reup *darker spots. i darkened the base a little, i did have the intention for her to be silver 03:27, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

This is so adorable, omg. Can you define the shading a tad and add some more depth? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:47, May 18, 2019 (UTC)