Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 3

Brightheart (A) - Tweaked
Original artist myself... patch on head was deemed to be in the wrong position so I have uncovered the eye as requested. -- Sandy star 10:58, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patch on the leg (Or it might just be my computer) anyways its really good  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 12:01, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, which leg? -- Sandy star 13:57, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oops the one nearer to us my mistake :)  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 15:29, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandy star 21:25, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I would say to blur all the patches a little more, and darken the eye color as it is hard to see the light green against the white backdrop. Other than that this is marvelous. --Bram ble 22:26, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandy star 06:59, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

There have been no comments for well over 24 hours now so I'm going to archive this as I would any other image. -- Sandy star 14:56, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ashfur (A) - Tweaked
Original charart by Caroline Stimpson. I redid the shading and blurred the spots. Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 12:53, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe a bit more shading? It seems a little light to me. Out of my way, Kittypet! I'm not in the mood! 19:35, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

The spots seem to be bigger in his warrior image. Maybe make these ones bigger to match? And fix the shading in the tail; it looks like he has a lighter tail-tip and that it's not shaded. Oblivion Got it memorized?  22:19, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. Blur the tail shading and ear pink. ♥Ice storm★  12:28, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Made the spots bigger and blurred the tail shading and ear pink. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 15:17, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Improvement completed. -- Sandy star 14:56, July 21, 2010 (UTC)