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Smokefoot (E) ~For Approval
Shading is hard.

01:26, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to say this, but define it more. I have to zoom in close to see it. I also think there's an unfilled pixel on the tail? 01:43, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add depth to the ear pink? It seems a bit flat.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:35, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

06:06, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could still use defining

Reuploaded

19:44, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 22:09, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

03:03, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

hm the shading could still use some defining. try darkening it and then using a 40 opacity eraser tool to erase the edges? 05:18, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Updated.

02:44, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more shading along the bottom of the face and the ears. There's also leaking shading on the front elbow area. You're doing great! :) 21:54, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Vec, I think I got it? I'm just terrible with shading lmao.

22:51, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

waste behind the head

smoothshading out Willowstep12 (talk) 17:21, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed

18:29, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, given the source, there wouldn't be any shading on the front of the chest; rather, it'd be on the < side. I also believe the haunch shading should be receded and rounded out a bit.

Better?

19:02, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

hmm maybe could you smooth the shading on the haunch to shoulder place? it seems a little hard -- 13:57, 4/07/2019

Looks fine to me? Might be my screen though.

00:03, April 8, 2019 (UTC)

should add some shading to the chest area, close to the front leg if you get what I mean

i agree that it needs to be smoothed out– especially on the shoulder and the haunch. 13:16, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded If that doesn't work then I may need some recommendations.

19:53, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

You have some darker black pixels in the shading. Here are three things to help with smoothing the shading out:

1. Run the blur tool at a rate of 10px 100% strength

2. 10px smudge tool at 40% strength

3. Only if you're desperate, use Gaussian Blur at 1.0 several times  22:28, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

You can also smooth with the smudge tool.  Ellie  life is an illusion 06:18, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Moss (KP) (KP)- For Evaluation
Comment Away!-- 18:54, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Looking good! Her muzzle looks a bit bright compared to the rest of her set, so darken it up a bit. Expand the shading everywhere, but particularly on the hind legs. 19:14, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks Egg! I colorpicked off the loner, not sure why it looks brighter. Will fix momentarily. 19:45, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't want to expand it anymore on the tail, or I'll be told to define the light. 19:54, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe smoothen out and blur the shading more? -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:35, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Of course! I'll do that in a little bit. 22:39, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Shadow, can you be more specific on where it needs to be smoothed out? 22:52, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the back of the haunch and shoulder! -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:58, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it more on the <--- haunch and stomach? The shading is also leaking on the collar. Also, I feel like the shading tint clashes with the color of the image. Maybe make it darker? 23:14, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vec, where is it leaking on the collar? And can I gently ask for a second opinion on the tint? Silverfur used a similar color on Flailfoot's tunneler. 23:37, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded for other commments 23:48, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. I can't see it at all. ​

red line. And the tint is darker on Flailfoot's tunneler since it was tweaked. Darkening the tint might also help with darkening the shading overall, forgot to mention earlier ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 02:59, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

i appreciate you mentioning me ^^ could i ask what's the black specks near the rear leg? -- 11:34, 4/01/2019

To explain comments:

Vec: It isn't leaking, it's just light shading. I'll fix it next upload.

Silver: That's a layer goof, fix next upload.

Jayce: I'll saturate the shading a bit, but like 2 clicks or so otherwise it'll look neon. 22:06, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded here's your proof shading isn't leaking. Better? 23:06, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a bit darker? I can't really see it. 23:09, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Potato, I didn't say you had to saturate the shading. I couldn't see it, meaning it should probably have the opacity turned up. The tint itself is perfectly fine as-is, and you're right that multiple people have used that tint before. ​​

Reuploaded sorry, got confused with your's and Vec's comment. Anywho, I don't want to darken it much more or the lineart won't be noticeable anymore. Better? 23:31, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the ears, belly, tail, legs and back ^^  -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  23:36, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think with the source I'm using, there shouldn't be shading on the back. Shadow, can you screenshot where? 00:11, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like you've got waste all over the image. 01:46, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think there is any waste on my screen in PS, but this may be a result of blurring the shading and I'll check tomorrow. 02:09, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded you were right, and there was waste. If it is still showing up, I'll wave the eraser in those areas tomorrow. 02:32, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

going to nitpick on the shading as it's really light and makes the image odd. it can be tweaked by making the layer mutiply and making the tint a darker blue. -- 04:46, 4/02/2019

Reuploaded changes aren't showing yet. 21:43, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

Changes are now showing. 22:09, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading out more? 05:17, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, paws and legs. 12:37, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ham with Gaussian Blur. Better? 22:36, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blur the gray muzzle and ear-pink and I really can't tell where the light it coming from 00:19, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'll blur the muzzle, but can I gently ask for a second opinion on the earpink? On a previous declined art, I tried to blur it but it looked like a hot mess. The light is coming from the right, so the shading is on the left. 00:49, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded for paler muzzle if I need to blur more just let me know. 00:53, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

you still need to smooth out the shading. 02:17, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Used the smudge tool this time. 21:57, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Theres waste everywhere outside the image 23:53, 4/04/2019

Reuploaded if it's still there, idk what to tell you because I'm pretty sure I erased it all. 01:07, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

It is still there unless the changes are not showing. Try having a white background so that you can see the waste more clearly.

Reuploaded I think I got it all. 22:04, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading some more ? 14:23, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded also tweaked the paler muzzle. 15:23, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again waste. It should be gone now, cause I noticed more and got my lucky lasso. 15:35, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, there wouldn't be any shading on the > side of the haunch, nor at the top of the shoulder, though it should extend higher up the arm from the bottom^^

Reuploaded  20:25, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

The waste is still there under the front arm. collar shading is leaking <-

define the light on the front leg nearest to us? -- 13:56, 4/07/2019

Reuploaded I'll get rid of the waste later. 15:18, April 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you perhaps try smudging the muzzle, and using a tiny brush to smooth out the shading on the collar? 13:30, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I cannot smooth it out on the collar anymore, or it'll look odd. And I tried with the paler muzzle, but anymore smuding or it'll look too light than her other images. Better? 01:27, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Hate to be that person, but the shading on the collar still looks hard edged. Perhaps try a strong blur/smudge tool on the edge of the shading

Reuploaded Okay, positively sure I can't do anything about the collar shading now. 99.9% sure... 23:46, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

it honestly still looks hard edged. and theres definitely something you can do about it. also, the entire shading still needs to be smoothed out 08:41, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it more but I really like hard-edged shading styles (for ex. Wrenflight's star). I may need to define the light on the collar. And remove waste.. which I'll do after I fix Rootpaw. 22:04, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Wrenflight's star isn't in use nor is it approved. I think it could be smoothed a tad more around the middle.  Ellie  life is an illusion 06:15, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

There's still waste around the image.

Rosetail (E) ~ For Approval
back and ready for the elder rush

15:00, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Did you fill in the nose? It's either not filled in or is a very light color. Define/Darken it. 22:11, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

The nose is filled in and doesn’t need defining. ​​​​​​

Stripes seem to fade in color a bit more as they go down the front legs on the other images^^

Reuploaded

22:13, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hm. So I meant the stripes become almost lighter/less visible as they go down to the paws on the front legs, could you see about perhaps tweaking it a little more?

Still working? 17:12, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Longtail (e) ~ For Approval
his stripe pattern is annoyingly spacy but ya' know.

15:34, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Would you object to softening the stripes every so slightly? These are a tiny bit sharper than his other images. It's not a lot, and I apologize if this is insanely picky. ​​

Can you make his eye more cloudy? On the original elder and the soon-to-be redone warrior, it was completely clouded over and the pupil wasn't visible. If I'm wrong, you don't have to do it. ;) 22:27, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

22:17, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could be my laptop, do let me know, but the base on this seems darker than the star. Ik the star and app don't match, but the star would be more correct due to being lighter per his cites

The Star was also the first one tweaked, so it has to match that anyways. ​​​​​

Still working? 17:14, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Light-colored Thunderclan Kit (K)
helloo this is a minor character from bluestar's prophecy so em here.

Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 21:45, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

feel free to comment!

Don't thumb the image! Simply remove |right and that should fix it. Add earpink and shading to the back back foot, the shoulder on the front foot, and the haunch. Smooth out the shading, as it's very hard-edged. 21:54, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed the shading!

Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 22:16, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

I fixed the thumb. Don't do that in the future! Smooth out the shading more and expand it. Also remove "mod" from the file name.-- 22:44, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

I accidentally made the pixels bigger by alot, so I had to reupload it. Sorry for any inconvinience, but I'll try to work around it. Made the eyes have a bit more depth, tried to smooth the shading but not by alot. The image's name is BP.kit.lc Waddle Dee; The Kirby Fanatic! 11:31, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be added/defined/expanded/smoothed out. The file name needs to have the kit's number, not the pelt color. You also somehow deleted Star's comment?? 14:07, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

The file name isn't important right now, a lead can always rename it once it's been approved. But if you'd like to upload it under it's correct name, it would be BP.kit-2.png (it's the light colored thunderclan kit, i believe?) Do you need a shading placement guide for this? I could provide one if needed. Can you smooth the earpink and add some eye depth? 15:10, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for reminding me Patch. The earpink needs to be expanded to the left. Also, before you deleted her comment, Star said for you to blur/smudge the pale parts on his/her face. Maybe enlarge the pupil? It's kinda hard to see atm. 15:39, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

You've still got some time left, but are you still working? 18:54, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Silver Frost (E) ~ For Approval
pretty kitty 00:59, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light in the ear closest to us. 01:19, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:43, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm assuming your light source is heading < that way towards the cat, so remove the shading on --> side of the shoulder/forearm area, and ---> side of the haunch. 02:32, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit, please. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded 23:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

define shading a little bit more on the ear furthest from us? -- 13:52, 4/07/2019

Hm. Vec's comment doesn't seem to have been addressed - the light source is contradictory as is. To most easily remedy what's there, the shading on the > side of the arm and the > side of the haunch, and any shading along the back that's further than the shoulder would need to be removed. Then, the shading'd be expanded to the tail tip, belly, < side of the chest, < side of the visible arm, along the backside of the cat and some reaching to the chin.

Reuploaded Spooky is shading all you're allowed to comment on? 01:47, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Uncalled for bro Malina457 (talk) 03:04, April 10, 2019 (UTC)malina

What seems to be the issue here? Spooky was just making a statement that Vec's comment hadn't been addressed; there's nothing wrong with that. ​​​​​

Lawl. Anyways, that did get most of it, but - expand it on the belly, add more light on the fully white front paw/lower leg (there's also some leaking from the top leg to the one beneath), it needs to be expanded > way on the haunch, and the tail tip shading cuts off rather abruptly, which looks a bit awkward.

Tabby Warrior 1 (W) ~ For Approval
I hate doing the headings for these... 01:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

This may be hard, but define the tail shading a tad? It blends in with the brown. 01:44, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

could you dull that white down so that it looks like a pale part? also could you taper the stripes some?

smudge the stripes into a bit more of a taper at the ends, they're a little too paint-brushy 05:59, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

With all due respect, why can't I leave it white? I based this off my own kitty. Unless there's some rule with minor characters I missed...? 11:36, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Unless the character is described as tabby and white explicitly, adding white would be an assumption.

Reuploaded Uh... I tried. Also, RIP, sorry Misty that I couldn't make you a charart... If anyone finds a Leafpool-like cat with art to be done lmk? 23:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

There is quite a bit of waste outside the tail, and one small speck outside the chin/neck. 23:41, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

if there is supposed to be shading, could u define shading on the tail i can barely see it -- 13:58, 4/07/2019

Expand the shading on the < side of the lower back to curve down and meet with the pale bit down there - and remove the shading on the > side of the haunch, as the light source doesn't call for it.

Reuploaded If this isn't better then I need help. I also may have inadvertently lightened the overall shading more than I meant to... 01:47, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Hm yeah it is better but I'd re-darken that to a little past what it had been before.

Flaxpaw (App) ~ For Approval


03:48, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs?  Ellie  life is an illusion 04:55, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

06:57, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? It looks flat. 12:09, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

maybe add some more leg and body stripes. 20:58, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

02:27, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail and along the back. 17:01, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

19:25, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 22:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to break, but shading could be added/defined on the stomach and -> side of the face

Reuploaded 08:15, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Star) ~ For Approval
I borrowed Feathertail's linear art.

could you possibly make the tail a bit bushier? from what I've been told, a squirrel tail tends to be pretty poofy. 21:09, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

They are extremely poofy, and as this is, I don't feel it matches her other images too well. ​​​​​​​​​​​

Agreed with Skt and Jayce. 00:13, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also define the shading depth on the ginger a tad? Looks a leedle bit flat. 01:08, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded pooooooof

Re-uploaded changed tail pattern to match apprentice

Could you smooth the shading on the white paw?

There's some waste outside the --> cheek and in between the loop of the tail  23:09, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Could you possibly smoothen the tail lineart?  Ellie  life is an illusion 06:09, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded I tried??

Myrtlekit (Ki) - CBA
First charart! I'm absolutely in love with her name... Myrtle- is a good prefix. Juniperbriar (talk) 14:26, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good! ^^ Define the shading depth; this can be done by adding another layer of shading, but increasing the opacity and not having the shading extend beyond the first layer. You can kinda see it on the image above, on the shoulder and flank. Brightheart's elder is also a clear example. 17:48, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Might fiddle with the shading some more. Juniperbriar (talk) 19:51, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you redden/dullen the earpink a little? It's a little too bright for the pelt color. This is really cute!! 20:11 Tue Apr 9

Reuploaded. Thank you! I also messed around with the shading some more and I'm happier with it now. Juniperbriar (talk) 20:24, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

since you know what you're doing more or less, I'll promote you to an apprentice; you can use for approval for your headings now. can you define the shading a bit more while you're at it?

Reuploaded. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:47, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Shadepelt (TPB) (E) - For Approval
yeh 20:07 Tue Apr 9

Smooth the tail shading? 21:01, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded we love a medicore shading job 23:31 Wed Apr 10

can you smooth and lighten the shading?  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:55, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded redid the shading bc it was annoying me <span style="">01:22 Fri Apr 12

Millie (E) - For Approval
I didn't have the file so I matched it the best I could <span style="">20:56 Tue Apr 9

would you like the file?

If you would, please. I lost the original elder file when my old computer killed over. dp404813@ohio.edu <span style="">23:35 Tue Apr 9

Should be sent! It's an xcf file though.. if you need me to convert it to a psd let me know

Yeah I think it needs converted ;_; I have never had success with opening .xcf files with either of my programs <span style="">14:21 Wed Apr 10

Converted and resent!

Squirrelflight (L) - For Approval
The Queen ugh this pattern <span style="">20:58 Tue Apr 9

Can you add her torn ear? 21:00, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think this might be a Wikia thing, but her eyes seem lighter than her other images? Also, I love the bushy tail, it makes me happy. ​​​​​​​​​​

Maybe smooth out the shading on the <-- front leg? It looks really sharp compared to the rest of the shading. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:05, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the deputy that tail gives me life <span style="">21:52 Tue Apr 9

I believe she needs a torn eartip? Maybe I'm wrong though.

01:58, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

I agree that the eyes look darker on her other images

Reuploaded Then the eyes need darkened on the deputy. I may also mess with the tail to make it bushier. <span style="">14:38 Wed Apr 10

Could you smooth the shading on the white paw? Looks a lot more sharp there than elsewhere

I agree the tail needs to be bushier

Needlepaw (SkC) - CBA
According to I reserved her before Ari, however, if I'm wrong and Ari has rightfully reserved her, please decline this! Tinystream (talk) 22:13, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is your image, I checked the edit history. Sometimes double reserves happen, but in this case, Needlepaw is rightfully yours. Well done, by the way, I quite like this pattern. =) ​​​

CBA? --Bluedragon64 (talk) 20:16, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Bluedragon, you aren't a lead, therefore you cannot CBA images. ​​​​​​​​​​​​

i'll promote you to an apprentice as well since you know what you're doing and you can use for approval for your headings now. 20:25, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Ahh thank you! Also, a truck load of mistakes have been fixed, as well as making the shading on the black patches a little darker since I could barely see it. Tinystream (talk) 23:43, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws? 00:02, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Is this better? Tinystream (talk) 01:35, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reup The shading on the far hindleg made the pelt look gray, so I fixed it. Also a few other minor changes were made. Tinystream (talk) 02:46, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Nicely done! 02:07, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenfur (E) - CBA
This old man deserves some rest  02:23, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

could u define the scar more? -- 11:33, 4/10/2019

Can you define the shading on the < ear, < front leg (the upper part, including the shoulder), face, and add a little more on the belly?

Reup  22:57, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

sorry to break, but the scar is in the wrong place. it should be on his side, not his leg. 08:56, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reup  14:09, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

reCBAing it 19:44, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Pouncetail (RC) (E) - CBA
looking to redo Pounce's pattern and will put app up for tweak nomination. Also I left his tail at the normal length since all his images have been reverted from their shorter tail tweaks 03:59, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Same as Brightheart^^

Wonderful! Can you define the shading on the front leg furthest from us? 23:09, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Kitepaw (A) - For Approval


07:22, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Lessen the earpink in the ear closest to us. Add/define the shading and I don't think reddish brown cats get parts? Pinestar and Oakheart don't have pale parts. 13:05, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Recently we allowed pale parts on several approved images. (OS-1 gray queen and OS-4 >i think< silver queen come into mind)

You are only allowed to do one "new" image at this time. Please either withdraw the black kit or this will be declined. 17:30, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Pale parts can be added yes, but they shouldn't be so prominent if not specified; in this case, as is, it contradicts the cite by making him a bicolor with two distinct shades. The other instances were less so of a difference, either in color or placement.

I removed the black kit, so I'm not doing it anymore.

06:56, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Nice so far^^ I added the date you reserved this on the table, remember to do that in the future! Not sure if it's just me, but the shading looks like it's leaking a little on the chest. 23:32, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste around the image

gray warrior- for evauation
i know theirs no shading going to add it laterWillowstep12 (talk) 13:53, April 10, 2019 (UTC) reuploaded  added the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:42, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try! But can you desaturate the ear and nosepink? It's very neon as is, you should add some darker and lighter shades to the eye for gradient, the shading need darkening, and heavy expansion. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:06, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded is the earpink desaturated anoghtWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add shading and define your light source. I can't tell if there is shading. <span style="">16:24 Wed Apr 10

reuploadedWillowstep12 (talk) 17:24, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, and add shading to the back foot closest to us. Connect the shading on the front leg closest to us. There should be more shading depth to the image. 21:36, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also use some smoothing, and shading on the tail either needs to be added or defined, I believe. I think the current earpink darkness is alright, but it could use some desaturation to dull it. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded smoothed shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:50, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed more and the depth needs to be defined, all over. Define it especially on the back paws and tail. Line art appears to be blurred by the tail and front paw closest to us. Could you possibly desaturate the earpink and nose a little too? I think a paler pink would complement the gray better. 18:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

i wont be active for a week so please dont reject thisWillowstep12 (talk) 19:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Flutterkit (Ki) - For Approval
hi this is my warrior cats son <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:39, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, as all WindClan cats are given short fur unless stated otherwise. 00:55, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

reups didn't even know that was a rule but whatever. i liked it better long but its not like im allowed to argue <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:24, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, that's a rule we put into effect a couple years ago based on statements in the series. Given you're not super active, it's not all that much of a shock that you didn't know. There's no need to be as harsh as you were, though. ​​​​​​​​

Brighten up the white. 01:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Stonetooth (BP) (E) ~ For Approval
An attempt was made -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  22:57, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

I like the stripes! Can you expand the earpink to reach the edges of the ear? 23:09, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't seem to match to his other images (I checked) and should be expanded, he shouldn't have a pale belly (The StarClan doesn't show the belly however the Deputy does and it shows no pale in the area), His stripes appear to be a bit darker on the rest of his set than they are here, and maybe even a bit smoother, some also appear thinner on the rest of the set,and i also feel like the shading could do with some defining, I'm having a little trouble seeing it in some places, and can't tell where the lightscource is right now. But you did a pretty good job even though I don't make it sound so. i'm just bad with words lmao. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:11, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''The stripes are a pain -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  00:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Make the dorsal stripe thinner; to match the star

Reuploaded! -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  21:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Crowtail (E) - For Approval
StarClan will be done and posted in a little bit. Tried for a good two weeks to get a pattern I liked, came up with this. Not sure how I feel about it, and I am aware it probably looks "unrealistic". Since "realistic" tabby stripes are not a requirement, I think I can post this safely. ​​​​​​​​​

Define the shading on the legs a tad? Nah, I think you're fine if Tallpoppy's pattern remains untouched. 00:01, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added some light instead of more shading, does that look better? ​​​​​​​​

OH yes it definitely does! 00:11, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Potato, please refrain from unnecessary comments that are non-critiquing. Define the shading on the > ear a tad bit more? <span style="">12:01, 4/11/2019

As I said to Winter/Snowdapple on Discord, Potato's comment was in reply to my question, so it's perfectly acceptable. In this case, I don't want them getting into trouble for something I did ask them about. I'll get to tweaking this sometime tomorrow. ​​​​

Rootpaw (App)- For Evaluation
Here he is! Comments? First time trying texture. I freaking love him and his parents. Also, will remove that waste in a moment. 01:41, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:46, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, define the eye depth and add some shine to them as well. The shading appears to be leaking from the shading and on the chest next to the leg line art. Lighten the earpink too, it looks super dark. It also looks like there's some waste by the head. 02:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll fix all these things tomorrow! Ah, I was suspicious something was bugging me. 02:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded will fix more stuffs tomorrow 02:23, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Also, if your light is coming from the front, there some be some light on the fronts of the forelegs and the chest 02:25, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Leaking shading by the belly and haunch, waste by the tail tip and shoulder/neck Malina457 (talk) 03:02, April 11, 2019 (UTC)malina

Try connecting the body texture to the hindleg texture. Right now the Hindleg texture just weirdly cuts off. (Something like this, excuse my sloppiness -> ) Tinystream (talk) 03:30, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

vary the texture slightly more so that it doesnt look as paintbrushy. i suggest using a smudge tool and running it in the direction of fur/drawing more texture lines. in addition, her color looks unrealistically saturated and slightly green. i suggest googling light ginger cats and color picking for a realistic base color 04:29, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw should have shorthair lineart b/c it never said he had long fur--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:07, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

fur length is artist's choice when unstated. 09:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC) Understood--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked off Tree's MCA. Why does that look unrealistic? Malina, can you circle where? 13:05, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

IMO the image looks slightly green. Might be because of the texture/shading, but it could stand to be tweaked


 * I think it also has something to do with the black/blue based shading on top of yellow. I know shading tint is artist's choice but I think you'll have less problems if you used a darker orange or even red on top of yellow 16:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll try to address all of your comments! I learned from reading an archive that red is a good shade for yellow cats (Gooseberry's queen I think). I'll reupload later. Also yep fur length is my choice, I made him to resemble his "weird" father. 22:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:39, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

There’s some waste by the tail and ears! On the edges of the image/canvas. -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:53, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Around the ENTIRE tail. (my bold isnt working, sorry) Malina457 (talk) 00:14, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina

this is turning out better. you need to define the shading everywhere, and also smooth it out on the tail and the belly. it appears that the shading is leaking in some places, which is probably a result of abusing the blur tool. in this case i still highly recommend the smudge tool at 10-20 px to achieve the same effect as the blur tool, but better without the risk of having the shading leaking 00:28, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:25, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading on the backleg furthest from us -- 03:36, 4/12/2019

Seems like the shading is leaking on the chest, legs and tail. also can you smooth out the shading on the legs and tail? the texture also needs to follow the fur flow. what you have here looks like it's crisscrossing

WindClan gray tom ~ For Approval
I didnt know whether willow was doing the unknown affiliations one or the windclan one so I just did this one? also am not too sure about the darkness :/ couldn't see it too well on my screen but will probably lighten it for the next reup

There's a glob of waste below where the tail curves. Tinystream (talk) 03:09, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

reups also lightened it (considerably) and played around with the shading

reups tweaked the shading since i wasn't too happy with it

This is really good! I'm gonna bump ya up to an apprentice since you seem to know what you're doing. And perhaps define the shading depth? 12:16, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the chest shading a little and add some on the nose^^

reups

Sunbeam (W) ~ For Approval
i realize the shading is all kinds of wack will fix that tomorrow. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:40, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I don't know if straight uppurple eyes should be used. purple tinted blue sure, but purple eyes is pushing even the "realism isn't such a thing in warriors" and it's only ever been a mistake. 07:58, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I meam, warriors doesn't even really go off of realism so.. and i had the kit have purple eyes and nobody said anything. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:01, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

That was due to the smaller scale, and I was going to comment on that one. Most things in this world do not have purple eyes, I think you should change it to be a bit more blue-ish Malina457 (talk) 17:28, April 11, 2019 (UTC)malina

Could you smudge the white just ever so slightly, more so on the chest? It just looks a little hard-edged compared to the other white markings. 20:53 Thu Apr 11 2019

Agreed on the eyes; Also, could you define the facial shading? I can't see any at all. ​​​​

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:40, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw (K) ~ For Approval
Colorpicked from his apprentice. 19:30, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

His eyes are lighter darker on the apprentice. Do you need the psd. or do you want any hex codes from the apprentice? 22:00, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

If you could send me the psd that would be great^^ dunno if you have discord or not, you could send me it through there or via email. 22:41, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I have Discord and can email it to you. My Discord is Greenflower#7496. 23:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC) 23:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Texture should be much fainter. It's on 18% opacity on the apprentice. 23:52, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, the apprentice is so faint I can't see it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:58, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

The texture is on 18%. 00:01, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. Seems like shading

gray warrior- for evauation
i know theirs no shading going to add it laterWillowstep12 (talk) 13:53, April 10, 2019 (UTC) reuploaded  added the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:42, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try! But can you desaturate the ear and nosepink? It's very neon as is, you should add some darker and lighter shades to the eye for gradient, the shading need darkening, and heavy expansion. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:06, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded is the earpink desaturated anoghtWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add shading and define your light source. I can't tell if there is shading. <span style="">16:24 Wed Apr 10

reuploadedWillowstep12 (talk) 17:24, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, and add shading to the back foot closest to us. Connect the shading on the front leg closest to us. There should be more shading depth to the image. 21:36, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also use some smoothing, and shading on the tail either needs to be added or defined, I believe. I think the current earpink darkness is alright, but it could use some desaturation to dull it. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Songkit (Kit) ~ For Approval
it is she 20:09, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a tinnnnny bit of shading on the ear farthest from us, it looks flat. You also need to fix the heading, it lacks "For Approval". 21:59, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the eye color a bit? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion

Re-Uploaded! (and sorry for the lack of 'for approval', i was a little tired when i submitted this..) 01:42, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Blazefire (W) ~ For Approval
Blazefire, sweetie, you're doing amazing. 19:56, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lighten and smooth the shading on the back some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:02, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 20:31, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the facial shading?

It honstly looks fine to me.Bluedragon64 (talk) 10:33, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Nope agreeing with Fox. I can hardly tell it's there. 13:01, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Softpelt (W) ~ For Approval


i don't think there'd be much light on the back leg

the back leg furthest from us isnt filed in -- 08:46, 4/12/2019

Lightleap (W) ~ For Approval


here's my first pixel lol Tybaxel (talk) 00:54, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Don't thumb your images! I fixed it for you. Define the shading, and your lightsource. Smudge the pale parts into her fur more. 00:58, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded my bad! Tybaxel (talk) 01:27, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading more. 01:42, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

From the looks of the kit, it doesn't have pale parts so i believe that should be removed. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:49, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

imo she looks a little crosseyed -- 03:08, 4/12/2019

reuploaded fixed but i don't know how to define the shading anymore than i already have lol. also i did not see a kit sprite anywhere for her so i just made a design from scratch Tybaxel (talk) 11:20, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

this is his kit image: File:Lightkit.kit.png. correct me if im wrong, but i dont think it is mandatory to match it since it is not in use. 11:23, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

it still needs to match up to tigerstar. 11:26, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

match up to tigerstar? so should i color pick from tigerstar’s sprite? and remove the pale parts? to be fair the pale parts are really low opacity though. i just added them for realism. Tybaxel (talk) 11:20, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Wrenkit (SC) (k) ~ For Approval
baby -- 03:07, 4/12/2019

can you define the eye color/depth? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:32, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Stonepelt (e) ~for approval
he wishes to be a cool kid -- 03:45, 4/12/2019

Woodpaw (App) - For Approval


Second attempt at doing a charart. Let's hope my files don't get deleted 04:48, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images, or, in your case, have |left in the file. :) 05:15, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define your light source? (or at least the light on the face)? 05:32 Fri Apr 12 2019

Reuploaded - Tried to define the head light source a bit. I imagine that it's a setting sun glowing overhead, slightly setting down over it's rump. (If that makes sense)  06:05, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the leg light coukd be defined more, can't really see it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:00, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Which leg, sorry? 06:05, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

All of them, imo. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:19, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Cloud With Storm in Belly (E) - For Approval
my shading tint is red 05:15, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the front leg closest to us? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:19, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (Q) - For Approval
i tried. color picked everything from her warrior file 06:45, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

hm i believe her stripes are slightly more hard edged and are more spacious? 07:59, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

yeah her stirpes should be more spacious. Bluedragon64 (talk) 10:42, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) - For Approval
ah a tabby pattern from another era... honestly i kinda want to revamp the whole set 06:45, April 12, 2019 (UTC)