Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Broken Shadow (KM) - Tweaked
Darken the shading, OA was me 01:07, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit or tone down the highlights please. =) 02:48, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

The coloring and stripe pattern really doesn't match the sharpclaw very well... Also, lighten the shading.

Blur the shading and I think there's some blurred lineart on the arm closest to us. Also, you forgot the the white paws. Define the depth in the eyes too? 21:12, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Will anyone throw a fit if I just redo it? 22:08, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. I certainly won't. Go right ahead, Scar.

Re-uploaded Wahhh!!! Don't look at it! It's ugly!  02:00, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's not ugly. Maybe blur the shading? Crys tal  hea  rt! ❄  05:08, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think that the shading's fine, beautiful btw Scarlet. 05:10, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

No I agree, it should be blurred. Also, lighten the paws a bit. 01:33, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:43, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Cloud With Star in Belly (E) ~ Tweaked
So I tried making her pale gray, and I defined the shading. OA I believe was 'Teldy. c: ew she looks ugly and blotchy 22:29, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Possible blur the shading and make the earpink less red and mre pink. =) 23:55, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the highlights? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 15:30, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

And tone them down, please  04:15, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Also lighten the base pelt color. It's too dark.

Mosskit (Ki) ~ Redone
OA of the most recent version was Ivyheart, I think. Had multiple issues and would be better off redone. Don't ask me to darken the gray, as she's pale gray and white.

Aww! She's so cute! <3 Darken the shading on the tail and face a touch and maybe darken the ear-pink a touch 04:43, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Scar<3

Do images have to be the same pelt length? Cause the other image is shortfurred...idk... 09:55, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I don't quite know. I think I've seen images as different pelt lengths before. Plus, I think that image needs to be tweaked anyways. And since both of her parents are long-furred cats... I just kinda did that.

It's not really all that natural to have a gray cat with white patches, you think you could reverse her pattern? Also, yes they're supposed to be the same fur length, and I think the other image is fine right now... 01:32, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Stick (W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for the same as the rogue...I tried with the colour... 02:53, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a little more raggedness to the tail? o3o

Re-uplaoded. I dunno about the tail, the raggedness is in the same place, I just think the rogue looks more ragged because of how the tail is on that blank. o3o 04:57, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Well, raggedness doesn't always have to match. Especially since they're two different ranks at two different timespans.

Re-uploaded. Raggednes for all 22:42, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart(Ki) - Redone
Redone for color, OA is the wonderful deputy Cloudy. I got all colors from Scarlet. Comments? =D 03:18, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripes. ^^ 03:26, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:52, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a touch more. Nice job Duck :3 03:57, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading.

Re-uploaded 04:15, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Just saying. I'm not the OA. I believe Wildheart was the OA of this file.

Whoops, sorry I just saw that you uploaded last. x3 14:20, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart(A) - Redone
OA was Ivyheart. Comments? I don't like this owo 03:25, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

It looks nice, but the markings, particularly on the haunch and tail, look like they're ON TOP of the pelt rather than PART of the pelt. Can you blend it a little more? sorry if I'm not supposed to be commenting; I placed a rejoin request on the page, so if I can get back in, I won't feel so bad about critiquing o.o Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 03:27, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

You can comment regardless of whether you're in the project or not storm. :b It's just tweaking you need to be a member for. Tint the shading red a tad, and darken and define it. 03:30, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:37, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste around the image Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 04:40, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Some of the stripes seem sorta blunt compared to the kit, maybe sharpen them a but or something? 12:49, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:20, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the last of the waste that I saw. owo 14:52, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Ki) - Tweaked
Dx I tried. OA was Icy. Tweaked to define the dapples. 04:37, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) - Tweaked
Once upon a time a user decided to go on a suicide mission and tweak an image instead of redoing it. Tweaked to match other images. OA was Dewstar(leaf). Comments? 05:16, December 2, 2012 (UTC)