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Pipsqueak (GC) - For Approval
Pipsqueak the pirate. ouo

I think the shading is leaking on the <--- forearm where the white meets the black belly fluff? I love this pattern! 19:38, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I got it?

Maybe define the shading on the tail a bit more. Did you get the pipsqueak the pirate from mop? Lol. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:11, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You mean MLP? Dang right I did. Pipsqueak is one of my favorite side characters, so when I saw they used the name in Warriors, I couldn't resist seeing if I could get his image.

Dotty (GC) ~ For Approval
I'm not sure if the larger ginger patches would need stripes. 16:56, 11/30/2017

Re-uploaded. Changed the pattern. 17:47, 11/30/2017

In regards to your question: we used to say that adding stripes to ginger-and-white patched cats (people being picky+art style changes haven't shown this recently) was a choice, depending on patch size and all of that nonsense. I'd say we'll still abide by that. Plus, you can only add so many stripes on an image.

Ah thank you! Okay. I just wasn't so sure it'd be allowed or not. I did a google search for ginger and white cats, and most had tabby stripes on the ginger. So I just added it. 18:25, 11/30/2017

Well, just because google says something, doesn't mean we abide by it. While stripes are mandatory on solid ginger cats, when they have something else, it's a bit different. It's the same as a tortie that has ginger; stripes are not mandatory on torties who have specified ginger parts as well. It's an optional thing as far as I'm aware.

Cobweb (GC) - CBA
I love him. Too bad my new pen isn't here yet so he looks ugly >.>'; 17:15 Thu Nov 30

Reuploaded I lightened the shading. Still hideous since I suck at blurred shading, but its a little better. 17:18 Thu Nov 30

Define the shading depth. Cool! 22:13, 11/30/2017

Reuploaded 00:40 Fri Dec 1

Could you make the eyes more green? They look a little blue to me right now. Could you also define the ear pink a little bit? 01:58, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think it's an aqua green. The shade of green wasn't specified so I think it's okay. 03:23, 12/01/2017

Actually, the cite for him having green eyes was talking about Fierce, not Cobweb. Eye color is now Sunjaw's choice.

Reuploaded This looks better. 15:43 Fri Dec 1

Define the shading on the tail and chest area? Tbh, I never thought I would do Blanks for this wikia! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:10, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just ended up redoing most of it since I got the pen yesterday. 14:53 Sat Dec 2

Could you define the shading a little bit? 16:53, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Wait, are you allowed to deem it CBA??? He hasn't reuploaded since I've posted that comment. 14:53, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

I actually didn't notice your comment, my apologies. Also, Sunjaw uses she/her pronouns.

It's okay. And my bad on the pronoun, Sunjaw. Wasn't aware of what pronouns you used. 15:07, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded You're okay! I don't usually make references to much about me lol. And this is as much as I can define it on the tail without completely masking the pattern. 22:03 Sun Dec 3

Okay, now I'm going to CBA this. lol

Feather (GC) - For Approval
White GC it is then 21:02, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a touch? everyone is using the long-haired blanks xD <span style="">21:10, 11/30/2017

Perhaps lighten and smooth the shading a bit, define it on the back hind paw closest to us. 21:42, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the head. This is good :) 22:49, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! i know :^) 01:46, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think there is some shading leaking onto the > forearm from the...haunch shading? Don't know how else to describe it. Not from the belly, but the other side of the forearm. 00:34, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got it. Fixing that leaking shading was a pain x.x 16:24, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot to make the (very faint) texture layer visible again 16:28, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Peanut (GC) - For Approval
these blanks turned out lovely. appearance is based off of my cat. 21:41, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

There is an image to match Patch. <span style="">21:44, 11/30/2017

oh! lol i didn't even notice! i'll reupload in a bit. 21:49, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. all right, there we go. 22:03, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the <-- front leg? This is really pretty!!

Re-uploaded. thank you! 01:43, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Shouldn't this have herbs, like Spiresight? She is a healer, after all. 22:28, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:02, December 4, 2017 (UTC)

Boots (GC) ~ For Approval
Comments? 22:03, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

He seems a tad too..red? Maybe lighten the shading a touch. <span style="">22:14, 11/30/2017

Reuploaded. How's this? 22:19, November 30, 2017 (UTC)

He still looks red to me. Maybe make it more brown? 01:47, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink looks orange. make it just a few shades redder?

Reuploaded. Colorpicked from Husker, cause why not? 02:59, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

What is that dark red line on his eye? Is it a scar? <span style="">03:29, 12/01/2017

Yes, it is. 03:34, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Is that scar allowed to be there? He isn't specified with any scars, and he could've lost the eye due to an infection. I'm not sure about the missing fur around the eye either. <span style="">03:38, 12/01/2017

The scars are fine and I think it's artist's choice in this case as to whether or not to add them. I've seen this on other images. Boots doesn't have an eye; it's not just gonna be a blank socket as far as I'm aware. There's bound to be at least some scarring around it, regardless of how he lost it. It doesn't say he's blind in that eye, it says he doesn't have the other eye. I'd be more surprised if there wasn't scarring.

can u add some more depth to the shading and maybe the eye socket itself 19:28, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:41, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Dovewing (GC) - For Approval
while doing the shading i realized halfway through i was using the wrong brush sorry if it looks weird lmao. also, don't these need to be added to the shading tutorial thing?

will reups for green eyes in a min pls don't comment on that

reups

Smooth out the shading a bit more 00:27, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups just took the blur tool over the entire thing. rip

There's a speck of waste outside --> haunch. <span style="">01:05, 12/01/2017

Try defining the eye depth and/or expanding the pupil--that may help with the eyes.

reups the pupil is supposed to be small. if someone else agrees, i'll widen them a bit, but slit eyes are my favorite :^(

Perhaps desaturate the shading just a tad. And I will be adding these once I get the pen for my tablet. <span style="">01:48 Fri Dec 1

Could you define the eye depth again? --ErmineGlow (talk) 01:50, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups okay I KNOW I'm really annoying for this... but can I get a second opinion for the eye depth? honestly I can see it just fine and I think it's really clear as a transition from light to dark. it is my image so I'm probably just biased lmao

I think the eye depth's fine imo. Anyways, I don't think the smoky parts have texture on the other images? I'm probably wrong though. Could you define the ear pink as well? 01:56, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

Eye depth is fine.

reups the choice of ear pink color was not a good one for this pelt color

I actually think the eye depth could be defined a bit, and might the transition to lighter/darker colors in the eyes be softened a bit? It seems a little too abrupt and sharp, and could probably be blurred or smudged or something.

seems to be a little shading leaking from the foreleg closest to us (near the top of it) and the base of the tail. 19:29, December 1, 2017 (UTC)

reups I have not once blurred or smudged my eyes, but ok. (i'm sorry if i'm salty it's been quite a day. merry christmas)

Can you define the shading in both ears? 00:33, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

I put the ear pink over the shading because it was really hard to see. I'm like 86% sure I can do that?? idk if I can't I'll go ahead and put it back

Whoops. Sorry about that - didn't mean to make it difficult. I'm just having a hard time seeing it that's all. 00:45, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Shading ear pink isn't even a requirement of the project. It's a personal preference. Danny, the ear pink is difficult to see if you place it under the shading, so I think in this case, we'll let it as-is, no?

sounds good to me 👌

Fierce (GC) ~ For Approval
Easy-to-match pattern? Never heard of it. Also I apologize for the gross shading here, will fix it later.

She doesn't look like a tortoiseshell. She looks more like a brown cat with orange flecks. Also, it didn't say Fierce was missing a leg, only that one was shorter. <span style="">00:30, 12/02/2017

I think if you add some black in there, it should be ok. also if you just make the paw lineart more visible on the shorter leg, that should solve the problem. ^^ 01:04, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Between the start of the tail and then under her missing foreleg, connect the hind leg to make it appear and not have the tail be directly next to it without showing the hind leg where it sits. (If this doesn't make sense I can do a redline) <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:07, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Yeah, Cosmo can you give me a redline?

Could you add another toe to the shorter foreleg? On the normal blank that leg has four toes, not three. 16:44, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Maybe define the shading a little bit? 22:50, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shorter leg's paw should droop a little more, since it's just hanging there

Rascal (GC) ~ For Approval
Some more short-hair love 00:26, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Is the nose filled in?

Yep. Just doubled-checked. It's a very pale pink, but I can make it darker if it needs to. 00:36, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

In my opinon, maybe make it darker. It clashes quite a bit and looks too light for a darker cat, but I may be wrong! :) 00:48, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some shading to --> behind the muzzle a bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:08, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 04:13, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Spiresight (GC) ~ For Approval
He has herbs because he was a healer right? My little bby Spire </3. I'm so happy how well done my blanks are.. thanks everyone for the critiques! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:00, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (GC) ~ For Approval
Let me know if I did anything wrong! First image; stripes are not my forte ;n; But overall, I think I did pretty good. Thoughts? SpookiEevee (talk) 03:56, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

This is really pretty! Good job on your first image! Define and smooth out the shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:59, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Really nice! Define the ear pink in the <- ear? 16:26, December 2, 2017 (UTC)

Marigold (GC) ~ For Approval
it's been forever. i might've named this wrong idk 04:40, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth and the eye depth

Expand the shading a lot, and add some shading to the ears. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 07:17, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded 21:31, December 3, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit

Expand the chest shading. 01:59, December 4, 2017 (UTC)