Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Sol (Ro) ~ Redone
Okay, it needed to match it's loner image, and it was pretty much impossible to tweak and get a fine result, so I ended up redoing it with permission. I did redo it, more of a tweak, on the same image, but I'll say it was redone, 'cause that's how it was except on the same image. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 00:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

His muzzle shouldn't be black, and make the earpink a bit more triangular. :P Sky To Kill An Empire 00:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the white on the chest paws and belly. 00:11, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the earpink by any chance? 01:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also redid the whole image because it didn't match the loner. 05:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Add the tufted ears ^^ 17:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 18:53, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Crop it some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  00:15, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Crop what? If it's the tufted ears, it matches the other images. 02:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I meant crop it around the lineart. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  15:06, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the chest white parts a tad. 14:40, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Rowan, I'm not changing the white, 'cause since the light source is above, the light can't hit the white at all, so it's in the shadows, giving it a darker color. 02:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern doesn't really match the warrior image. There's too much black and the placement's a bit off. Could you try and match it? 16:06, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know...I'm withdrawing this. 17:36, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Don't forget to change the heading, but if it's alright with you, I'll take this over. 04:11, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Ki) - Redone
M'kay, needed to be redone to match the deputy image. Original artist was moi. Kits are soo small! Dx 02:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

He's so cute! Spread the stripes out more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  03:34, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose pink like the kittypet and rogue images. 15:10, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

The nose pink is fine since the rogue and kittypet are going to be redone. Blur the earpink a tad. So cute! ^^ 16:54, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white pixels in the eyes....white. XD Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 12:12, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:51, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give him the slightly lighter chest & muzzle like in his other images? Elork  13:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken the stripes just a tad to match the other images? 00:27, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:54, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W) - Redone
Okay, Willowclaw. OA was Bramble, then Sky. Was redone due to shading. :3 Comments? 17:46, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink a but. 17:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, but? You may have been on that site too much xD Blur the shading and maje the earpink less red. Ugh, Willowclaw. I hated that redo xD Sky Everyone likez teh cats 05:08, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Maje? Sky, you've got it too. :3 Anyways, Reuploaded. 23:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit~ ☾ ~Pouncey~ ☽ 04:14, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 20:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Percy (Ro) - Redone
OA was Cherryfur123. I reserved this before the tweak/redo nominations thing passed. I feel that the stripes looked kind of odd and the shading was weak, and I got permission, but if enough don't agree, then just decline this because I don't want people fighting. Image not showing. Pattern is based off my real cat so I'm not changing the pattern. 02:07, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hickory!!! <33 Can you make the earpink more red? :3 You're fine Ivy. 02:09, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little? Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 12:10, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded You got it right, that's who this is ^^ 05:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink where it's smudged. 07:01, 23, 02, 2012

Hickory!! <3 You finally made him! ^^ Anyways, blur the earpink all around actually, and define the shading a bit. 18:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded :)  23:55, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste :P gorgeous, Ivy. 01:54 Fri Feb 24

Reuploaded   15:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno if the changes aren't showing or what, but there's still waste under the belly and tail. 06:05 Sun Feb 26

I don't think changes are showing. I fixed it. 00:53, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose(MC) ~ Redone


Was told to redo. Ew...Comments?... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons, and make the ear pink bigger. 02:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, the patches... Try looking at Spiderstar for what patches ought to look like on short-furred cats. And could you go back to the old pattern? I'd rather not have to redo the MCA unless absolutely necessary. 02:29, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, define the shading so it actually shows up on the white, please. 02:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please go back to the old pattern. Redoing doesn't necessarily mean changing the pattern. There's no reason to redo his other images. Anyways, darken the gray to match and darken the shading all together. 18:30, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, me and another SM chat (not gonna mention names unless she tells me to) think this should be auto-declined, as it's not 80% complete. 20:25, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

It's at least over 50%. Maple, you have a week from the upload date (2:08 AM Wikitime on the 23rd) to get this over 80% before it's declined. 21:45, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maple, are you working on this or not? 04:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

No i'm not, 'cause of the car wreck, im spending so much time in and out of hosspitals, and only have one arm...i cant work on this, 'yall, i'm sorry. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 01:07, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

If this is up for grabs for people to take over, I will. 05:50, 27, 02, 2012

Sorry to hear about that, Maple. Okay, DJ, you go ahead and take over. 12:46, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lightningpelt (W) - Redone
It was on the redo list. I just redid the stripes, but I suppose that counts and a redo since it's half the charart. OA was Sandy, if memory serves Hawkfire, then I redid it. Comments? 02:43, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Aw man I wanted this ;) This is totally beautiful <33 Lighten the shading a tad. 02:46, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye Sir! 02:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

That's one heck of a skunk stripe. XD Could you continue the stripe down her tail? It doesn't make much sense to stop there (not that it makes much sense anyway, skunk stripes are super rare) 02:50, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. <3333 05:00, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

And make it less of a bright red. 83 Sky Promises, promises 12:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:56, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Redone
I've always wanted to put this up. Original artist was Sparrowsong, with Bramble taking over, then Icestorm/Appledash redoing it, then redone by Frostheart which was declined, and then Rainfacestar took over, but she withdrew it. His stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 18:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ooooh, Lovely! ^^ Just blur and center the earpink and fix the paws and it'll be perfect. :) 18:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also define the shading a little? This is phenominal, great job! 19:07, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad (along with that Ivy said). This is amazing... I love it. Job well done. =) 19:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ... :')! 21:12, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry - and this is a beautiful image - but since I nominated him, don't I have claim to his images? I had an idea of what I wanted to do for his warrior, but I wasn't sure if we were going to redo him completely, so I held off until I was sure. This probably sounds really selfish of me, but could I please take over this image? You could do his apprentice or kit if you wanted to. 21:53, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think that rule has been integrated yet. 22:27, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

While it may not be a "rule", it's still common courtesy; since it was my idea, I thought I would get claim to it. You don't have to give it to me, but it would be much appreciated. 22:56, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'd rather keep this, since I really like it. You could do one of his other images. 23:19, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more 02:28, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and define the shading. 02:05, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:38, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He looks really green; make him more brown. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 03:24, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't look green to me o3o Define the haunch shading and enlarge the earpink. Sky Promises, promises 12:09, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty, Leaf! Define the scar and the light on the tail a bit more, please! 01:20, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Once you enlargen it, define the earpink. (Unless, y'know, it matches with the other images). 09:59, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (H) - Tweaked
OAs for this were Night Shine with a redo by Rainlegs. He needed mud but I also tried making him look skinny with wiry muscles. If that doesn't work out I can always remove it. I tried something new with the mud :3 And I'm sorry to Wildfire for stealing this :C 00:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the bit of static in the top right corner. 00:17, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mud. Also, I fixed the heading for you. 00:19, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Aw I'm fine, you did a good job (better than I would've) and that's all that matters. Add mud to the tail and paws. 00:56, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:52, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Redone
First elder for me. ._. 03:06, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 03:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad and make it more triangular. c: If ya use highlights, tone them down a tad, otherwise just blur the shading like Cloudy said. *Is stupid Dx* Sky Promises, promises  06:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneteller (OTS) - Tweaked
Needed mud, and as you can see, I was peer pressured into giving him a lot. >.> OA was Moonflight, with a redo by Iceheart. 12:11, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give hiom a little less mud? He looks like a brown and black cat...D8  Elork   13:37, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Nah, you can clearly tell he's black, but, I do advise defining the mud so you can tell the difference. I didn't notice it until now, actually...otherwise, I'd have told you on join.me. XD 18:54, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. He really likes mud baths. 17:07, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Could you take a bit of mud off? He really does look like a brown and gray cat XD 05:46 Sun Feb 26

Can you try and darken the base pelt color a bit to match the cave-guard? I still have the .xcf file from when I re-did him, if you want the colours. 05:58, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:30, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make his eyes more amber? They look orange. o3o Sky Promises, promises  06:45, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Heavystep (E) - Redone
I love Heavystep the Undying. <3 Redone to match his warrior as the old ones were triangle tabbies. Original artist was Blackclaw09. Breeze whisker  00:59, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Aha, so you finally got it done 8D Is it me or are the stripes lighter then the ones on the warrior? Eh, maybe not 02:30, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 18:56, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Defined the stripes and earpink. Breeze whisker  23:43, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match the rest of the images. Comments? 18:57, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink unless it matches with the MCA. <3 19:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 02:31, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (W) ~ Tweaked
Blurred the highlights, fixed blurred lineart, and eye wasn't in depth. OA was Ashshadow with a tweak from Atelda, I think. (This is my first tweak so please tell me if I'm doing this right.) 19:12, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around. 01:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:59, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights. Also, I fixed the heading for you. 02:03, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't match his description at the moment. It says he's a dark grey tom, and now he looks like a light grey one. :3 When I nominated it, I was told to redo the colour too. 02:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (W) - Redone
Modified triangle tabby or something. x.x OA = Ashshadow with a tweak by Sweetflower. Sky Promises, promises 03:33, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Amazing, Sky dear! :3 Define the tail shading? 05:21, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tail shading on short hairs. >:U Sky Promises, promises 05:30, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. Also, agreed on the tail shading. 'tis a pain in the "add", if you catch my point. ;) 05:56, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (Ki) - Redone
To match other images. <span style="">05:53 Sun Feb 26

OA was Icethroat (derp) <span style="">05:54 Sun Feb 26

Define the earpink a tad. <3 -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:09, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lionheart (A) ~ Redone
It was redone to match the deputy. OA was Nightfall101 and was redone with the new blanks by me. All of the lineart is the same cuz I'm lazy XP Comments? 07:54, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I lightened the shading. 01:59, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink. Lovely, Mounty <3. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 14:05, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lionheart (W) ~ Redone
Redone to match the other images. OA was Dawnfeather I think and was tweaked by Sky. Everything is exactly the same as the deputy except for the tail and legs. Comments? 21:16, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is his warrior and apprentice different shades of golden? 01:31, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think I can see it too o3o Blur the tail shading. :3 *Glares at mane* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises 05:24, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploade Eh heh Sowry Sky. The base coats are the same color o3o 05:52 Mon Feb 27 05:52, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, it was evil anyway. 8F Define the top half of the tail shading a tad. *Likes stalking your images* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Promises, promises  12:46, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Redone
I don't know if changes are showing, he needed to bbe redone to match apperntice image. OA = Bramble. 22:17, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading. 02:05, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Ratscar (W) - Tweaked
His scar needed to be defined, and since the torn ear on his page was a false cite - and had been since April - I redid the earpink. OA was Icethroat, with a redo by Atelda. 03:07, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's a lump of extra lkineart in his ear. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 14:04, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) - Tweaked
I personally think it needed to be tweaked more for the shading, but the stripe needed to be defined. OA is Evanphoto, with a tweak by Appledash. <span style="">05:54, 27, 02, 2012

Can you blur the shading a bit on his chest? 09:53, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I was going to get this... I nominated him. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:04, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the part of the stripe thats on his tail. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 14:03, February 27, 2012 (UTC)