Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Whitewing (Q)- For Approval
--My first charart. I did the best I could. Comments =) Darkmoon25'

She is completely white. Don't worry, when I started making charart, I would be that with white cats too. You need to make it a light gray, because if it's totally white, then shading won't work. Do you know how to shade? Because if not I could teach you.-- ♥Halloweenclaw 13:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

There's a few blurry sections of Lineart, and the shading should probably be thickened a bit. I can't see anything. XD (But that might be just me) The ear pink should be blurred out, and in a triangle shape. But don't worry, it's pretty good for your first charart! :) Just a suggestion; If you already know this, i'm very, very sorry. But you should go to http://pixlr.com/editor and use that. Using that program you can use the blur tool to blur shading and ear pink (Be careful not to go over lineart, and if you do, just open up paint and go over the black lines with the pencil tool) and you can use the 'Burn' tool to darken parts, etc. Once again, I'm very sorry if you already knew about pixlr. =)  Shistar BOO! 15:16, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Shigura covered it all.-- *Minn owc law*  15:17, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the one cheek and behind the ear, it is lighter than the other spots. --Mosspath  of Skyclan 15:29, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

For shading, use the burn tool. (if you already know this, ignore me), and run it over the back, hind leg, and other places that have shading. --Rainwhisker 09 19:25, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

Okay, the lines that were blurred are a bit too thick now. And there still isn't any shading. XD (I checked. XP) There should be a few white pixels in the eye, (Look at Ferncloud's eye to see how it should look) And the ear pink should still be more triangular and blurred along the outside. =)  Shistar Mai Talk Page! =) 17:22, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

There are only still some white parts near her face and her ear.-- *Minn owc law*  23:13, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

(S) - Maybe it's me, but the eye looks turquoise. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:29, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

hmm... my main problem is that you've now made her so far off-white that she looks pale grey... =/ Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:40, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Make the shading darker also, and blur the ear pink slightly as it looks like it is now painted on. (ps. please sign with ~ so we can see the timestamp, thanks) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:35, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, pretty much what Sandy said. Also, to make her less pale gray, use the dodge tool at about size 70, and the brush that gets lighter out. (Please disregard if you knew this.)-- Mossy SC  22:33, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

re uploaded. I lightened her and darkened the shading. also changed eye color. finally i Blurred the ear pink. please approve this! Darkmoon25

I don't know, she still looks pale gray to me--Nightfall101 23:40, November 10, 2009 (UTC) I dont see anywhere she is pale grey. Except for the shading.Darkmoon25

(S) - I can tell you changed the eye, but maybe make it a darker green, like on her warrior image. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:18, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25

I have a few things and although I don't often do them, I've drawn you a diagram (yay!) to help show you what I mean.

Okay: the red circle shows where I don't think you need the shading as it wouldn't go around the whole lineart of the tail. The purple shows where you need to add shading, the blue shows where the lieart is blurred. You also need to blur all the shading into the pelt as it's quite messy. The background needs to be made transparent and the ear pink is too bright (I put a patch of the colour I would recommend next to the ear although there are other colours that can be used on white cats and look good) Hope this helps =) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:16, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25

Darken the belly shading more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:46, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 Darkened the belly shading

Almost there. Just blend the shading and make the ear pink more triangular and she'll be ready, I think. [Note: you don't have to upload under a new file name each time, just choose a name that's something like: Whitewing.queen.png or Whitewing(Q).png or Whitewing_Q.png and reupload over the old one each time instead of having whitewingqueen2, whitewingqueen3 etc. These extra files just clog up the wiki] Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:43, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Ok i will get to that. But I tried to upload files on the old image but my changes are not being shown. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

Sometimes it takes a few minutes to change. I find that often mine don't change for a couple of days: I'm not quite sure why but it may be something to do with temporary files stored on your computer, or it may just be the wiki being slow. The best person to ask would be Eu. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:16, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 It showed my changees! Anyways I blended the shading and change the ear pink shape. Is it ready?!=)

(M) - Almost. There's a bit of blurred lineart on the tail, and the shading on the belly looks darker than the rest. Also, the ear pink is too bright and needs blurred more. Fix those things and then she should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:52, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I dont see any blurred lineart but i will work on the other stuff later tonight.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

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Just think the shading on the belly a bit and blur it, and she'll be ready. :) Nice job. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:27, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 blurred belly shading.

I think it needs to be blurred a tad more.-- Darkhallows 11:08, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 This has gotta be ready now.

Make the ear pink a little bit thicker at the bottom of the ear pink so that it's similar to the lineart of the ear pink. Also, this may just be my laptop, but I think this still looks like a light gray. Run the dodge tool over it once or twice (making sure the eye color stays the same and doesn't get lighter) and it should be good. --  Icy -chan  01:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

OK i will try to thicken the ear pink. and on my computer it does not look gray. Why does everybody have to find problems with my art just when it was gonna get approved? any way how do u like my Christmas siggie?<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

It does look a little grey to me too. People find problems with your art because they're trying to help you improve it for the benefit of the wiki; it's not a personal thing. (Also, nowhere here can I see that it was about to be approved) And yes, your siggie is cool. I need a christmas one, I'm feeling left out ^_^ Sandy   Talk   16:44, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Run the dodge tool over it, maybe, and then fix the eyes. That might make it look whiter.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:22, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Lightningpelt- For approval
A minor character. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 00:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

The white streak on her back would probably be on the lineart, rather than on the side of the pelt like it is now. Otherwise, great job, Hawkfire! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:26, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Icethroat, and also make the ear pink more of a fine triangular shape, and less of a bright pink color. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦ <font color="Purple">Contribs 01:49, November 9, 2009 (UTC) Awesome! Um I don't really see anything *goes closer* Nope &#91;&#91;User:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;background:silver; color:goldenrod;&quot;&gt;&#39;&#39;&#39;Icestorm&#39;&#39;&#39;&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;sup&gt;&#91;&#91;User Talk:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;color:blue;&quot;&gt;How&#39;s the prey running?&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;/sup&gt; 02:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Make sure you make it slightly smaller, as we probably wouldn't be able to see it all. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:04, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the streak on the back, and worked on her stripes and ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 19:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

nice work. but now I can hardley see the streak. maybe make it a bit bigger and longer. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

Your tabby stripes seem to be blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:56, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 23:11, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok the image still looks good. but I can hardly see the ear pink and the streak looks more like a patch now then a streak. But good job <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

This hasn't been updated in awhile. Please update soon.-- Darkhallows 11:04, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 19:36, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart around the neck area, and the lineart on the back is a bit too thin. Also, the ear pink is touching the bottom of the ear when it should be a fine triangular shape, kept inside the ear lineart. Fix these things, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a week; please work on it or it will be declined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry about that! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 21:46, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Snowfur (Q): For approval
Well she died as a queen so here ya go.



Comments? --Bluestar1776 22:23, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Some of the lineart on her ears are blurred a lot, and I can barely see any color on her nose. Also, there definately has to be some shading, and I would maybe blur the gray on the ear that's farthest from us (her left ear), it looks like a circle--Nightfall101 22:27, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - sharpened ears, darkened nose. --Bluestar1776 23:17, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add color to the nose, make the lineart on her hindleg and her front leg that is closest to us black, and lighten the eyes. Also add shading. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:38, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened lineart, colored nose. --Bluestar1776 16:03, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Drumroll, please!! *drumroll drumroll drumroll* Thanks, Echo, for showing me how to do the shading! --Bluestar1776 19:21, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I an kind of see that there is shading but you need to darken it slightly. Use the burn tool and rn it over a few times. Then use the blur tool to blend the shding in. Also, the ear pink needs to be more triangular Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:15, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened shading, fixed ear pink. Lol, is it blurry enough for you? Hahaha I'm just kidding it sucks. --Bluestar1776 17:12, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I put up two versions. The second one is a thousand times better, in my opinion. --Bluestar1776 17:29, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

I still can't really see the shading on either version and you've now blurred the lineart... more noticeably on version1. Use the burn tool to darken the shading and then fix the blurred lineart. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:03, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart, mostly on the forepaws and belly. And you don't need to put the image at the end of the section, because the changes appear above. And don't forget to leave your sig so we know who you are. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:10, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Don't know if it's just my computer, but it looks like her shading turned into spots on top of her spine. don't know if it just me or not. --Honeyrose34 23:35, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

You're right about the shading Honeyrose. Try and brush it up a little, make it straighter and more even. --Nightfall101 03:15, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - fixed the shading. --Bluestar1776 19:11, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Looking good. But I would lighten the shading on her belly and chest, it looks like it's gray there instead of just shaded--Nightfall101 21:59, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - should I lighten it any more? --Bluestar1776 22:11, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's coming along great! Try and even it out on back though, it still looks a little bumpy--Nightfall101 22:14, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - lightened the shading on the back. --Bluestar1776 22:19, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I have to eat dinner, will work on it more after. --Bluestar1776 22:21, November 17, 2009 (UTC)



The red is where the lineart is blurred, and the blue is where the shading needs to be darkened--Nightfall101 22:58, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I fixed the areas you said to. Better? --Bluestar1776 00:22, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It's getting a lot better! But, all the shading still needs to be both thickened and darkened--Nightfall101 00:27, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened the shading on the back. --Bluestar1776 00:51, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, but it's still hard to see. Thicken the shading on the back and tail, and try straightening it--Nightfall101 00:54, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I don't know what you mean by "thicken", but I did my best. --Bluestar1776 02:09, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Is the gray on the ear tip shading? It looks very sudden. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 14:48, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

It's not shading, Snowfur is supposed to have gray tipped ears. But the shading really needs some work, it looks bumpy and uneven--Nightfall101 21:15, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 23:33, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

The shading isn't as bumpy anymore, but it still needs to be evened out--Nightfall101 22:21, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you should get rid of the images that aren't being improved. I'm not really sure which one I should look at.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:20, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 14:51, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, the shading looks much better. But there is a spot at the base of the tail that's to dark, lighten it up a little. Also, you seem to have forgotten to put pupils in her eyes --Nightfall101 22:33, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I lightened that, and she does have pupils. --Bluestar1776 00:23, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

She's almost there. Just blur the shading a tad more (be careful not to hit the lineart) and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:31, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. Anything else? --Bluestar1776 19:47, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

I hate to keep commenting about this, but I can hardly see the shading anymore--Nightfall101 00:23, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well Nightfall, I think that may be your imagination. I know because one time you told me to fix the shading. I didn't do ANYTHING and posted "reuploaded" and you said it was much better. I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Bluestar, this isn't about catching other users out, it's about getting good quality images for the articles. This project is a team. Teams trust each other and if you said you'd reuploaded then it is assumed you've actually made the changes... I can't see the shading much either so you need to make it darker. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:01, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well it's just that every time I change it it's to dark, then I change it again and it's too light. Then I don't change it all and it's PERFECT. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Reuploaded - Too dark now? -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

(S) - Could you blur the shading a bit more? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:50, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

It should be blurred more, I think.-- Darkhallows 11:09, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred it, but you can't really see it... -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

The ear pink colour is too bright. Make it like the colour in  Sandy <span style="font-family:Freestyle Script;color:Goldenrod;"> Talk   20:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - fixed ear pink, is it too big? -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

The ear pink looks fine. Thicken the shading on the back some more, make the eyes look more like the eyes on Willowpelt's queen image, Lilyfur, or Splashheart, and part of the lineart on the belly looks blurred. Otherwise, great job! -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:52, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 01:07, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) - For Approval
Technically he died as a deputy, so here ya go. What do you think?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He's GGOD!!just add more the shading, and blur the ear pink. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#ff1493">Talk 04:12, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He needs a little more shading, and possibly highlights. Right now he looks flat.(I shouldnt say that, because the computer screen is flat) Ok, he looks 2-D.-- Shad owed  heart  12:59, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes don't have a pupil/highlight. --Bluestar1776 15:57, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and the lineart on the hind leg that is furthest from us is blured. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:32, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading, blurred the ear pink, and fixed the hind leg. He already has a highlight in his eye. I sort of made a highlight at the top of his head, but I'm having a little trouble with them.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  16:19, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like you darkened the shading rather than thickened it. Can you thicken it some more?-- Ashshadow My Clan 21:55, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well I darkened and thickened it, but I'll thicken it some more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:53, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

You need to add a bit more color to the eye, and add a pupil/highlight. Here's an example: (Don't critcize, I just made this in like 2 minutes and didn't bother with shading.) Anyway, see how his eye has more color? Lol sorry meh image ended up a little higher than yours. --Bluestar1776 22:02, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Er, I can't see the image.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  06:22, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Try using this as a reference on how to do the eye: --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 16:34, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading and fixed the eye.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:05, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the eye looks goo, but the shading needs blending. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:34, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Ignore me if you want to, but the eyes look kind of red to me. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:54, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the midriff, and the eye does look reddish, make it look more like the color of Lionblaze or Cora's amber eye color. Also, the shading could be blurred some more, it still looks bumpy in some spots. Otherwise, great job! --  Icy -chan  03:27, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the eye more orange-ish, and blurred the shading as much as I could.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  22:51, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The midriff still needs shading. Look at Bluefur's deputy image, or Ratscar for shading on the midriff. --  Icy -chan  22:02, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Ah, yes, now I see what you mean by midriff.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:01, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Daisyheart-- For Approval!
Here's my 1st, well...2nd. Besides that here's Daisyheart. Not fond of the name but thought she would be easy for me. Comments? Concerns? --Honeyrose34 00:16, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is a huge improvement! I would maybe thicken the shading a little more, and there's a line of white running through her whiskers where it should be ginger. Also, there is a lot of blurred lineart--Nightfall101 00:20, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Good job Honeyrose. I think you used the thumbnail version instead of the full size for the blank. Can you make it bigger?-- Ashshadow My Clan 00:29, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, i honestly don't know how, i didn't even realize till you said that. I just uploaded it up and it just did that. Please tell me how!! --Honeyrose34 00:31, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else, still don't know about picture size...--Honeyrose34 00:35, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

There's still some blurred lineart, and I can a spot that needs to be blurred right around the base of the tail--Nightfall101 00:41, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Okay how to make the Charart bigger (sorry you have to re-do it) You click on the blank on the PCA Project page. Then it will bring you to a page. You click on the blank again (left click) press "save picture as" then do what you nomarlly do. (Does this spund confusing?) I hope this helped you! <font color="#0000ff" style="background:Lime">Icestorm <font color="#add8e6" style="background:Blue">May StarClan Light Your Path! 00:47, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Icestorm-- i DO do that. I didn't have a problem with Whiskerpaw before. See him in the #25 declined at the bottom. You'll see what i mean.

Nightfall-- i don't know what you mean about the tail need to be blurred thing. Could you maybe upload my Daisyheart and then circle it or something, i don't understand.

Okay, any MORE comments!? --Honeyrose34 00:52, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I can post the full sized blank to your talk page if it would help.-- Ashshadow My Clan 01:01, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

That would be great. You know, this is the 2nd time you offered to save my butt. I thank you SO much. Do any of my real friends at school help? No, they don't like Warriors, only Twilight. Exept for one kid. I don't know what she like's to read. Back to the real world, thanks Ashshadow!!! --Honeyrose34 01:08, November 21, 2009 (UTC)



The red shows where the lineart is blurred--Nightfall101 01:22, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I managed to make it large for you, I did have to redo the eye, because the resizing killed it. I hope you don't mind.-- Darkhallows 11:39, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Shady: How on earth did you resize it without blurring it? I have longed to know how to do that. Honeyrose: The shading needs to be thicker and needs to be on the white as well as the ginger areas - try making your white slightly off-white so shading will show up. Also, blend your shading. The ear pink needs to be a central smallish triangle of a rosy/salmon pink colour ad blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:19, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

The edges were a little blurred, so I just made it a little bigger then the lineart and erased them. If that makes any sense.-- Darkhallows 11:52, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

!!!!!!!! I'm so excited! Thanks SO SO SO much! This helped me a WHOLE lot better, Shady. I'll fix the blurred spots Sandy and Nightfall. I know, i wasn't able to reply yesterday, but i went to see New Moon. It was really got but long because we had a half hour of credits to wait for more and more people to come in. Man, it took a long time but it was totally worth it!!! --Honeyrose34 15:35, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I was just editing her when i saw that i didn't blur the line art, the line art black just messed up the ginger when i was bluring. I'm right now trying to fix it. Sorry 'bout that kind of confusion! --Honeyrose34 15:43, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Forget my last comment, i almost forgot that Shady redid it for me. Man, i'm really dumb........... Sorry again. I'm on a roll w/ these 'sorrys'! --Honeyrose34 15:46, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -the new image is at the top. i just darkened the shading a tad. Any more comments? --Honeyrose34 16:02, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Still needs more shading. Then she should be good.-- Darkhallows 23:37, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Don't know if the shading that's new showed up or not so i'll redo it if i need to. any other comments besides that??? --Honeyrose34 21:20, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments, anyone? I need to get at least another comment! --Honeyrose34 22:36, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink, so darken it, and blur the ear pink. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 13:29, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the patches a bit more and darken the shading. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:37, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Didn't do ear pink but wanted to see your opinion of the shading before i do do it. I think it's too dark now, but that's for you guys to decide! Comments?? --Honeyrose34 21:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yep, the shading's too dark, and is really messy. Look here to see how to do the shading. (For the white part of the fur, put the burn tool on highlights at about 12 percent opacity.) I hope this helps! --  Icy -chan  23:06, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Icethroat, I don't know what you mean about the white fur shading, and I don't have highlights anyway. The shading tips on your page weren't that helpful 'cause I already did that but the white was just the problem. Could you or somebody else explain to me what you meant about the ' 12 percent thing. --Honeyrose34 16:21, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

If you're using pixlr or another similar editing programme you need to choose the burn tool and choose a size of around 15. What Icethroat is saying is that you need to select 'highlights' which is a type of burn tool and change the opacity to 12. If you're using pixlr this will all be at the top of the screen once you've selected the burn tool. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:11, November 26, 2009 (UTC) D

Do what Sandy said. And sorry I put another Daisyheart up for approval D:! I didn't even see yours up for approval. I promise it won't happen again. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 17:56, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

That's okay, Sandwich!! Everybody makes mistakes! Maybe you just didn't see it reserved, 'cause I'm WAY at the bottom since I'm new!! --Honeyrose34 15:28, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Now blur the shading. (I feel bad for saying that so much.)-- Darkhallows 11:12, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The shading just looks like bumpy gray lines. Even it out and blur it. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Reuploaded-- Hope that's better. Comments?? --Honeyrose34 21:19, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Better but the shading on the orange patch on her back looks really dark. also the shading needs to be blurred more.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:02, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

How should i do it? I tried multple things but nothing worked. My sister couldn't give me any ideas either. I need help on that. If you can answer soon, great! 'Cause there is s Christmas light-up-night in my town i want to go. Please help soon.-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

To lighten the shading on the back, run over it a couple times with the dodge tool (make sure its set at "midtones"). If you use Pixlr, the dodge tool looks like a ball on a stick. Be careful not to make the area your lihtening too light, though. Have fun at the light-up-night, by the way;) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 16:26, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Don't know if changes showed up or not. I'll rereupload it if I have to. Comments???-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

I blurred the patches a little for you, because I've heard pixlr has a horrible blurtool; I hope you don't mind. In any case, I think the image looks ready now. But in future reference it might be easier for you to do a one-color cat. Comments before approval? -- Tinsel claw  22:48, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks So much, Bramble! That helped a lot!!-- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Dovestar-For Approval
This is Dovestar. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:25, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Nice work! Just lighten the shading a little bit. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 14:32, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

better? hope it's not to light :/. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 15:45, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. Just darken the ear pink a little and he should be good to go. The ear pink is really bright. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 16:18, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:31, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is still a tad too bright and it's too big. --Honeyrose34 21:12, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * Better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Now the ear pink is purplish. Try making it a light salmon-ish color instead. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:40, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

I know things are busy with the holidays and stuff, but please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:00, December 4, 2009 (UTC

yes hmm...I'm not sure how to get that color..:/ help? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Just run a pinkish color over the ear pink and blur it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 19:00, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

== mist where sunlight shimmers~for approval ==

well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it?? *santa pool*  07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --  Icy -chan  20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  pool*  07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.-- Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also Sandy   Talk   16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --  Icy -chan  21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better?? *Ivy pool*  06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look right, make it look like this. Also, maybe make the end of the tail a little bit darker than the rest of the tail (just use the burn tool a couple of times), so that it shows the shading more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:38, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (W)- For Approval
I ran out of file names for him. But Hawkey says he's ready. So what do you think? Oh and let me know if the changes don't show up. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 16:33, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Add higlights and blur the shadowing A LOT. Wait, is that the old or new image? <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:lime; background:magenta;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:lime;">Mousetalon Mousey! :)

I did add highlights. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:39, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Really? Did you use the dodge tool on the head too? :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined

I don't know. I'll do it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:45, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes won't show so I had to change the file name. Not sure if this is better or not <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:53, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Wow no more comments :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 23:48, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Yes there is, more coming at you! :) TGHe lineart looks unnaturally thick and the shading is too thick. Try smudginging the shading towards the linart (careful not to hit it) Gr.. stupid spelling mistakes. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:18, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

How do i un-thicken the lineart? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:39, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded GRRRRRRRRRRRRR had to CHANGE THE FILE NAME! Not sure if this is better or not. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart still looks blurred and thickened...to un-thicken the lineart, I think you make the inside of a blank transparent, and then paste the blank onto the image you already have. (or something like that, I don't know how to do it, though. Maybe someone else could explain a lot better for me?) Also, the shading it too thin on the inside of the hind leg right above the two hind paws, and all of the shading could be darkened some. Otherwise, great job! --  Icy -chan  21:45, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know how to put the blank on the image. But i'll do everything else. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:45, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Icy I don't know how to do that, Please help me do that! Someone! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Here you go. He needs tail shading.-- Darkhallows 00:31, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. Just what color code is this again? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 00:39, December 1, 2009 (UTC) (DECEMBER 1ST!)

Reuploaded I don't know the color code so could somebody tell me? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 21:36, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Wow no more comments. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:14, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

There is a white line on the tail.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 02:16, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I know. I need the color code to fill it in. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 13:04, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Im not sure what a color code is. If you mean those numbers and letters that show up when you change colors(if you use pixlr), use the tool that looks like a dropper.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:30, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah the numbers and letters. Do you mean the blur tool? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:00, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

No its called color picker tool and looks like a medicine dropper.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:04, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:17, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, it's way too bright right now. Also, the shading on the hind leg is too thick, try to thin it out some. --  Icy -chan  02:01, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">[[User:Icestorm123|Icestorm 02:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

WOW WOW wow WOW wow'' WOW no more comments. Come on peeps! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:17, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading as possible, and then blur the ear pink (and thin it if possible). Otherwise, great job. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:42, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this gets approved! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I have a couple of picky things. The ear pink is too dark now, run the doge tool over it a couple of times. Also, can you thin the ear pink on the other side, too? Last but not least, there's a gray line above one of the ears. (I know, they're picky.) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded So when is it approved? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:12, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some, blur the shading, and ighten the shading on the hond leg, it's darker than the rest of the shading. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:45, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink position higher--Nightfall101 06:50, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

How do I lighten the shading? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 12:54, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And run the dodge tool (the black ball next to the burn tool) over the highlights to lighten the shading.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:35, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lighten hind leg shading and blurred ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:01, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Okay any MORE comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:29, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been commented on in sooooooooooooooooooooo long. Anyways I really think that the earpink needs more blending but I'm not gonna do it unless you guys tell me too. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:03, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Hellow Ice! Okay, yes, I agree the ear pink needs to be blurred a little, and the position needs to be higher. His shading and highlights could be blurred a little more too--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:10, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Can somebody help me with the blurring the shading? Pixlr does have suckish blurring. Soooo right I am getting GIMP (If that's how you spell or say it?) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:26, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Hareflight- For Approval
Here's Hareflight. Her description looked easy so I took a go at it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:49, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job, Hawkey. Just blur the shading and highlights a bit so that they don't look so messy, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:31, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the color a little bit more natural, right now it looks dul--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:35, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened color, and blurred shading and ighlights to the best of my ability. THe upload log works again! :D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 23:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the tips of it's paws, the fur gets lighter. Fix that unless it's part of the description of him. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - Maybe add some shading around the belly/middle section? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:05, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Swiftstar (L)-For Approval
Is he okay? Warriors808 22:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't bad but you need to blur the shading and highlights. you might also want to add some shading to his left side.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:08, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Are you even online? Great for your first try! Just do what Ashy said and he'll be amazing! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:22, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Also, he needs ear pink --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The space right between his hind leg and his right fore-arm is white, it needs to be gray--Nightfall101 06:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his leg, it looks. . . smudged. And yes, add ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched for 7 days. Please work on it soon--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:08, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Night, Black hasn't been on because she was on vacation. She went to the cape. Anyways she's online right now so she'll upload it because she already had it done but it wasn't uploaded. Anyways Black, for the image maybe blur the earpink some more and the lineart on the leg looks....blurred. Fill that in black with the bucket tool and I think he'll be ready. Nice job for your first Charart. Oh and Night she works on these but she doesn't have time to upload them. She is always busy. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:32, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't know--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Gone on vacation or not, Icestorm, Nightfall was right to say something; if you're not going to be able to update the image for a while, either leave a message saying so, or withdraw the image but leave it reserved so you can put it up when you get back. Image-wise, make the nose color a light gray instead of a pinkish color, don't have the ear pink filling up the entire ear, just in the middle of the ear, and make the ear pink more like the color of Smoketalon or Graymist's ear.

Also, the shading still needs blurred a lot more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. She didn't know. She is only a newcomer. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blacktail called me and I told her what happened and she said she is re-doing this. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) - For Approval
Tortie spree! :D Constructments? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 00:17, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good. Maybe add some white because thats what her description says although it could always be wrong.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:28, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ OMG, I'm so stupid... I forgot to add white... >.<. Anyway, better now? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 01:44, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Only thing I got is add another shade of green to the eyes. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 12:52, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Great job!! But the white on the tail is bothering me. I really don't think it should be on her tail, but the rest of her is fine. It's just the tail. I kind-of seems unatural to me. Feel free to ignore my comment. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

I think the white on the tail is fine, there's probably more white on the other side of the tail that we can't see from this angle. Echomist, just do what Rainwhisker said about the eyes, and this should be good. Honeyrose, it's not that I'm ignoring your comment or contradicting it, it's just that there's probably more white on the tail from the angle that we can't see, as I said before. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:48, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

That really isn't necessary. The eyes look beautiful as they are. Comments before approval? -- Tinsel claw  22:19, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) - For Approval
My second charart. Comments? --  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is incredible! Just two things, first of all I think I can see a gray speck on his belly. And then (This might just be me being picky) but the face looks a little to dark. Maybe lighten up on the shading there?--Nightfall101 20:59, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Holly!!! I agree with Night that the face is kinda too dark. And maybe blur a little the shading and the pink in the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

i love it! although, i agree also, the face is a bit too dark and shade the ear. Otherwise, its fantastic! -- ♥Shine star♥  23:31, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks =). Better now?  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is looking good. But there are two spots where the shading doesn't connect with the lineart. Right on his butt, (yeah, I said it =]) And the bottom of his front right paw.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:07, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Fallowtail (Q)-For Approval


My first one!! Hope I did okay...I didn't know what her eye color was, so I just put blue. I got rid Of Dovepaw, because Minnowclaw was going to do her, and she just didn't look good. Any comments? -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 21:53, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The color is good but I can tell that the lineart showed up with a black bg. When that happens to me I paste the image into a word document before pasting and saving it in paint. Why not try that, otherwise this is good for your first one.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:53, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I'll try that thanks!! I try it later cuz I have to get off... -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:05, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

As of my last check, I believe Minnowclaw is doing Dovepaw. Could you please resumbit this as another cat? It should be fairly easy; there are lots of gray cats. -- Tinsel claw  22:32, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

If you added gray flecks the cat could become Fernpaw, but we're not supposed to do other ranks for cats already with chararts, as Tinselclaw (or Bramble?) says. The lineart looks like it's been thinned, as in some areas there is no lineart at all. Try thickening it and see what happens. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 22:45, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

She looks pixely. Try redo-ing it and save it as a PNG image. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 02:12, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. -- :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! 21:55, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Thanx, Icy! I'll try! -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:00, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added Shading and Highlights on this one I think...I'm new at this and I don't have a mentor, so I quessed at what highlighting is...I think that Fallowtail looks mottled now..:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 23:12, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

She looks kinda pink to me. Maybe it's my computer.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:15, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay 1. Don't change the file name 2. Highlights you use the dodge tool at 5 or 7 (square not circle) And go over the chest,the front paw,the head,the muzzle, and the tip of her tail. Then change it to size 30 (faded circle) and put one on the hind leg and everywhere else just make sure their together. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:34, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again now I know how to shade and highlight. Thanx, Icy, buddy!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:15, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again and again Comment please...-- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

You use the burn tool to shade. Once you got that blur the shading and highlights into the pelt. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:41, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Shiningheart (W) - For Approval
I tried a Goldencloud style on this...and epicly failed. ;( Comments and suggestions needed! --  Icy -chan  02:22, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Woah! Swirly=) The stripes that are right above the hind leg, the ones that make a circle, look a little strange, and there's a little bit of blurred lineart below them. And it looks as if there are a few white pixels on her tail, right a long the lineart--Nightfall101 02:51, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, I'm just an apprentice so my opinion does not count as much as a warrior, but I agree with Nightfall, The stripes are sort of circley (is that a word?) so if it is a tabby or not, you may want to fix those (plus the line art has some little gaps) -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 20:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if this looks any better or not; personally, I think it looks worse. I was trying to make it look sort of like this, but I think I failed...I'll try a different type of tabby stripes and put it on the right, and get it up soon, and then everyone can help me decide which one to keep. I should get it up soon... (Oh yeah, I got my holiday sig. What do you all think of it?) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:17, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, both versions are up. Which one is better? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:41, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I like the second one better -- ♥Shine star♥  01:49, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the second one is much better. But the stripe on her head looks very thick. Maybe thin it out a little--Nightfall101 01:53, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I'll blur the stripe on her head tomorrow. For now, I must sleep. ;) Anyways, I've got just the second image up for approval now, I like it much better than the first as well. :) (Any more comments on the image, as well as comments on my new Christmas sig?) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:18, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Think I got it... -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:03, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, that's much better! I'd blur the shading on her chest though--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 04:09, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:49, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

That's much better. But I just noticed the shading on the back and tail should probably be blurred more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:29, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:16, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I think the stripes on her haunch should go down farther. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:10, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ...not sure what to think now, I think I got it... -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:15, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

She looks amazingul. Comments before approval? -- Tinsel claw  22:18, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Nightwing (W)-For Approval
My second Charart! Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job!!! Maybe blur the ear more and either make the shading darker or the pelt lighter. Hidden -jimgle ♪  00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

It's AWESOME Icy, but blur the ear pink a little and maybe a couple shades lighter. Otherwise, It lookes great!!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:07, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be a bit smaller. It takes up the whole ear. Great job, my apprentice! :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:11, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Um I am trying to full it up to a lighter black but it fills the line-art to! Help! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:14, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still think the earpink is still too big. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

If you use pixlr.com you can either use burn tool to make darker or doge too to make lighter parts. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:06, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

And to blur the ear pink. It's too bright, run the burn tool over it a bit.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 20:16, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! But try making the ear pink more of a purplish-color. Like Fuzzypelt And maybe make it's postion a little higher--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Workin on it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:48, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is she ready for approval? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:08, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. I think she'll be ready after that-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred earpink. Better? Is she resady for approval? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:15, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Stop asking. It will be approved when it's ready. Add some shading on the top of the head and more on the chest. There is a dark patch on the haunch among the shading; get rid of that. also blur the shading as much as you possibly can. -- Tinsel claw  01:54, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I am sooooooooooooooooo sorry. And how do I get rid of it? (Please don't laugh) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 03:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ivypaw- For Approval
I don't know about this one...-- Darkhallows 11:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The gray patches seem smudged. Could you fix that please? -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Darken earpink.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:46, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

some one else was doing ivypaw,i think..-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:40, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Nettlepaw (a) For approval


My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA) -- for Approval
It may not be nessacary, but I made an image of Hollyleaf as a medicine cat apprentice. It is my first and I'd like to learn as much as possible. Maplefern 13:50, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I'd say to blur the highlights around the edges, fill in that white spot on her belly, add ear pink, and to do the eye according to this tutorial. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 15:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Maplefern 15:47, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I can just see a few things: The Lineart on the chest seems to be blurred and the shadding isn't blurred enough (and needs to be lighter) ;). Something happened to the lineart on the hindleg too, I think. Otherwise it looks great for you first Charart =). --  Holly... leaf or berry?

Reuploaded Maplefern 16:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Your ear pink is round and more closer to the begining of her ear (tip). And make it a lighter color. It's too bright right now. Nice job for your 1st!! And by the way, on your title, you don't need to menton it's your 1st. Just say the cat, what position it's in, and that it's up for approval. I fixed it for u. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded Is it better? Maplefern 16:21, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, like her kit version. Add some shading to the tail, and make all of the shading just a little bit darker. But this image isn't really necessary right now, as it says up at the top in the purple box that says "important". Can you find any other cat this could be? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I can't. Can you? Maplefern 22:51, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maplefern 23:35, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

What could I improve on? --Maplefern 00:45, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and shading still need to be fixed as I said above. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:34, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Maplefern 11:41, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

I tried. Anything else? Maplefern 12:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Coloring is great and all, but last time I checked, Hollyleaf was a short-haired cat. What about that? WoodClan

That is true. The other blanks of Hollyleaf are short-haired, I believe. -- Tinsel claw  01:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) - For Approval
Can owls even have whiskers? The Erins should have shuck with Owlfeather if you ask me... Constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright and I think (in opinon) that the tabby marks are too closse together. Feel free to ignore the marking part of the comment. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

(S) - Whisker? Really? I actually like the tabby stripes the way they are now. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:19, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ugh, had to redo this twice as it didn't save properly the first time. Better? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 20:45, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Bramble thinks it looks great. A touch early for 24 hours, so I'll do them in a little bit if no one comments. -- Tinsel claw  22:38, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

I waited; about 4 hours. :) comments before approval? -- Tinsel claw  01:55, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Smoky - For Approval


His family all has images; he needs one. Comments? -- Tinsel claw  19:42, December 6, 2009 (UTC) Wonderful job bramble,I could never get my ears as perfect as you do!--Firepelt 19:50, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Amazing job. . . I really don't see anything wrong with it. . .-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:14, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

One-eye (Q) For Approval
Yay! My first submision as a warrior! Okay, I did One-eye's queen picture because I've just always liked her, especialy when she was a warrior in BP. And the eye, I was trying to make it look cloudy but I don't think it came out quite right. Comments?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:47, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Make it like the warrior version; sort of a milky white. Put a pale pupil in as well. -- Tinsel claw  19:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with bramble.Make it more like a milkey white color,the fur is to much of a gray color, and I also agree to put a pale pupil,the eye sorta looks weird with out it.--Firepelt 19:52, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Reuploaded: Okay, I ran the dodge tool over it a lot, did it help? And how's the pupil? If it looks to precise I could blur it some--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:58, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry,but the pupil does need to be blurred,just a tad bit.the dodge tool did help though!--Firepelt 20:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Alright, I'll blur it. Right now I'm on a different computer and my One-eye image isn't saved on here. So I'll work on it later tonight=)--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:25, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait! Okay, I blurred the pupil, does it look better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:40, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...it still looks like an amber color, make it entirely like her warrior version, a pale white-ish color, and maybe a small gray pupil in the middle (where the blurred lineart is right now). Sorry if this doesn't help any. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:18, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:22, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

blurr the shading.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:42, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the shading as much as I could with pixlr--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 07:25, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Cloudy- For Approval
All of his siblings were being made, so I decided that I didn't want him to feel left out. Constructments? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 20:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Sooo Cute!!! Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:58, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

He's adorable! I'd probably make his ear pink a little bigger though, and maybe more triangular shaped--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

He's so adorable and cute!Make his ear pink bigger and more triangular though.He's purrr-fect other than that!--Firepelt 22:29, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Thanks! I couldn't really make it bigger (otherwise I would've smudged the lineart), but I tried to make it a bit pointier. Better? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 00:17, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Much better! --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:25, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the stripes a bit, and could you also move the pupils to the bottom of the eye instead of at the top? -- Tinsel claw  22:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sure thing! How's this? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 22:24, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! :) Comments before approval? -- Tinsel claw  22:37, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Milkfur(D)-For approval


I know,the chest shading is messed up,I'll work on that.Suggestions?help?comments?critque?--Firepelt 22:28, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

can you take it out of the thumbnail so i can see it better? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

i would darken the ear pink a bit. -- ♥Shine star♥  22:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darken ear pink-Check --Firepelt 23:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

It's too small. You've made it in the size of the thumbnail version. You have to click on the image on the main page, then save it to your computer and edit it.-- Tinsel claw  23:40, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. i REUPLOADED IT,MADE THE FUR MORE OF A MILKY WHITE COLOR,FIXED THE EAR PINK.THE SHADING,AND THE LINE ART AND EYES.--Firepelt 23:38, December 7, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Is there going to be anymore comments?I have seen on a list of need charcat art that milkfur needed to be done as a depty.I need this one approved so if i gett 1 or 2 more,Ill be a warrior,--Firepelt 00:51, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Its only been a couple hours Firepelt anyway the shading looks a little messy.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:55, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be faded and the shading is blotchy and messy.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How's the shading now?I fixed it with the dodge tool,and added some where I had forgotten it.--Firepelt 02:00, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

He needs eye color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:14, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

One-eye (E) - For Approval
I don't really know which eye is 'clouded and sightless. --<font color="Red" style="background:Green">Spottedwing 03:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The cloudy eye is the one that we don't see (On this blank) So I'd color the eye amber. The shading could be blurred a little more, and I'd probably add some shading to the front paws too. And I can barely see the ear pink--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 06:27, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

how abought blurring the shading?? *Ivy jingle jingle!!*  07:17, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (Q) - For Approval
I tried as well as I could to make this look like her warrior image...and failed. (btw, this is my first queen, aside from one on WarriorsCharacters Wiki, how bad is it?) Comments and suggestions? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:23, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! I think it's amazing! But something about the ginger on her right front let is kinda bothering me, it looks like a sleeve. Maybe blur it in some more, or smudge it? And her shading and hightlights look like they could be blurred more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:00, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. All hail Photoshop! Seriously, it has much better blurring abilities than pixlr does. I do the actual art on pixlr, and then any blurring that isn't blurred enough on pixlr on Photoshop. I likey Photoshop. I actually think it blurred it a little too much...but that's just my opinion. (enough of my rambling on...) Comments? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:55, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

That's much better! What imformation do you need to give when you get an account on photoshop? I want to try it--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 00:37, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I have no clue. My mom and dad installed it onto my computer when I asked them to. :P Bramble might know, though, I think she has Photoshop...to get an account on Photoshop, it's not really getting an account as much as it is installing the information from a CD, sort of like Word and Excel (I think...). Sorry I can't help. Anything else image-wise? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:54, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's awsome! And as for photoshop, that's alright. My parents might not want to install it, because my laptop had some major virus problems not long ago, from downloading stuff off the internet. I'll just have to see. Anyway, this looks amazing!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:03, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Fritz (Lo) For approval
I hate this image... So, comments? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:54, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The black is too dark. Make it somewhat lighter so we can see the lineart. Put a highlight in the eye (a white pixel), and blur the ear pink and white patches. Make the far ear seem more torn than like it just vanished.

And please stop asking me what I think on my talk page. Post your art here, and I will comment here. -- Tinsel claw  22:15, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I will stop, but I did blur the spots and ear pink, oh well, I will just blur it more, thanks! -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 22:53, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, Nightwhisker, do already have an image up? I thought you did. Oh well, maybe I'm imaging things. Besides that, the spots need blurred. They look like you cut them out of paper and glued them on there. I'm not trying to be rude, but that's just why you need to fix them, that's all. --Honeyrose34 23:30, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is far too big and bright. Burn and fade it once you make it smaller.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:11, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Mothpelt - For Approval


Beechstar's son. Comments? -- Tinsel claw  22:36, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Oooh, I like it! Maybe blur the ear pink a little more though--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:37, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Done. -- Tinsel claw  22:49, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! I'd make it a tinsy bit lighter (Sorry, the blurring made it a little darker)--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:52, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

It's lighter; I'm not sure if you can tell much. -- Tinsel claw  01:49, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

No, I can tell. Awsome job! *gives thumbs up*--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:00, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Cloversplash (W)- For Approval
Comments?-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 23:14, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front paw. And I see a red-ish color on the midriff. Fix that and I think she'll be ready. :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:30, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the fornt paw (the one closest to us) needs to be blurred. That's all I see. Nice job!! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Nice job Jingle(or do I call you mouse?)!!But could you add the pink to the ear?

oops forgot to sing. Hidden -jimgle ♪  00:17, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I cannot believe I forgot the ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:07, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Beechfur(A)-For approval


I was reading a list that sandy sent me of need charcat art,and it said "More needed"It listed Beechfur-apprentice,so I decided to take on my 1st apprentice,and I need it to be approved.Comments?Critque?Suggestions?Help?--Firepelt 00:39, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Really GOOD Fire!!!! All I see is maybe make the shading thicker. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

oh and I think you forgot to color the belly...it's white. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:19, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Could you please try and make your file names not so long? Beechpaw(RC).png will do fine. It's entirely too long like this. The image is actually very good, though. Also, why did you delete Berrykit's section off the page? -- Tinsel claw  01:33, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Look between the front leg and the haunch. There is a small section of white there. -- Tinsel claw  01:52, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Oh,yeah,I forgot about that,I already had it.--Firepelt 01:58, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Thrushpelt (WC) (W) For Approval
Man, Pixlr is really starting to get on my nerves. I'm gonna get either GIMP or Photoshop, all depending on what my parents say. Anyway, pixlr's blurring tool sucks, but I did my best. Here's Thrushpelt of WindClan, what do you think?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 01:59, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The image itself is awesome (try lightening the shading if it can't be blurred any more, so there isn't so much of a difference), but wouldn't Thrushpelt current image be a medicne cat blank? I know she was a warrior at one point, but in SotC, we mainly saw/heard of her as a medicine cat. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:07, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Crap!! How could I have possibly missed that?! Thank you Icethroat. Do you know how I could maybe, paste the coloring I did onto a medicine cat blank?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 02:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I tried, and tried, and tried, and *growls* I could use the clone stamp tool on Photoshop to copy it from the blank to the image, or vice versa, and I even tried to draw it in pixel by pixel, and maybe you can draw it in pixel by pixel, but my frustration after the stamp tool keeping hitting maybe an inch or so from where it was supposed to be, etc., left me with no pateince whatsoever. Sorry, but maybe you can draw the herbs in pixel by pixel, or you can probably ask Bramble to change it for you. (Sorry Bramble, I know you're busy, but I can't get that thing to work. I tried...I'm probably not using it right...)

Enough of my rambling on, even if you can't get the herbs for now, at least you can fix the shading while you wait. (Sorry...) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:55, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Well, I have a clone stamp on pixlr, maybe I could try it. Excactly how would I use it?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:00, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Well, I still haven't solved the blank problem, but I lightened the shading--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Emberstar (L) - For Approval
What do you think? -- Nightflight -  T  A  L  K  02:59, December 8, 2009 (UTC)