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Larchkit (Star) ~ For Approval
I love her design C:. Comments and suggestions for improvement on Larchie-Archie? I'll fix up the front shoulder shading and the tail shading soon to match the light source. Bb un   legs  01:39, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and give them a little more of a wave. They seem a little too straight. Also define the shading a bit.

Re-up. How's this? Also, fixed the tail and front arm shading to correspond with the light source. Bb un   legs  01:53, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

The wave in the stripes looks to block-y. Make it more of a smooth transition from crest to trough, rather than the crest jutting out of the stripe. 02:42, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine. You see cats with this pattern all the time. :s 05:17, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Leggo. Also, brighten the ear pink a bit, too. I can't see it, and it looks brighter on the kit.

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  15:30, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 22:57, May 8, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but the pattern does not match. If you look on the kit they are more broken up on the chest and the way you have them coming forward on the back and haunch does not look natural at all. Change the angle of them and make them go with the shape of the cat better. 03:48, May 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. How's this? I tried to make it match the kit more. Bb un   legs  22:23, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

It still doesn't look very natural. Change the angle of the stripes and break them up on the chest. 06:10, May 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  22:59, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

Primrosepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
um idk whether to put this up now or what I'm just gonna leave it here and see how it goes 01:33, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! The shading looks kinda blotchy, there seems to be a cream spot on the farthest paw, and it also seems gray. Also, I'm having trouble seeing the eye color. 12:22, May 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine, honestly.

The eyes are fine, as is farthest paw is fine in terms of the cream, but the shading gets lost around the lineart. same with the main body. Wanna fix that Sheepy? 11:40 Fri May 10

Could you define/darken the shading on the tail, perhaps? The shading looks a bit lighter there. This is gorgeous! 15:54, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thanks i tried 03:03, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on a Pikepaw 08:22, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Anyone mind if I take over? 08:23 Mon May 13

Re-uploaded. 08:44 Mon May 13

I don't think she's mottled. On the StarClan version she isn't. 21:54, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Hawk, it's fine. It's probably the shading that's making her appear mottled. Bb un   legs  21:55, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

No, I think I see what Hawk means. I think blurring the shading just a bit more might fix any mottle-y appearance? How you shade is just so awesome! 22:34, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Does she not have any pupils, amico? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 23:25, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 06:05 Tue May 14

Pikepaw (MO) (A) ~ For Approval
i tried lol 08:19 Mon May 13

Pikepaw (MO) ~ For Approval
yo 10:45, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the pelt colour a tad. But the belly fur can stay, and the black. 20:55, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Star) - For Approval
Vicky answered meh question! Anyway, here's Willowbreeze again! Comments? 12:10, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Scar, the cite for this doesn't say anything about her being in StarClan, it talks about the new novella. owo 21:02, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

I know what cite she's talking about. I saw it myself, I think. I'll fix it in a moment.

Cite's been fixed. Can you add a highlight or some variation to the shading on the chest? It seems rather flat.

Re-uploaded 23:41, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (Ki) - Withdrawn
Wow, that was hard to match, and it still doesn't match very well. ;-; Comments? 21:04, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Make him more mottle-y. He looks spotted. Can you define/darken the shading a tad please, too? 21:52, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded' I think that the shading is fine~ 23:48, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the chest a tad? 00:59, May 14, 2013 (UTC)

The pale chest or the chest shading? 01:04, May 14, 2013 (UTC)

Just thought I'd point out his SC doesn't have a pale chest that's where i was too lazy to put mottles   06:37 Tue May 14

I don't think it's really pale, just a lighter shade of gray. Maybe just darken the chest to match the StarClan version. 20:41, May 14, 2013 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing because 1) this image is annoying me and 2) we don't know if he'd even get this. owo 00:48, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

May I take over, if no-one minds? 00:59, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

Vicky said "Male?", which she isn't sure, so he doesn't even get images, so until we find out, no, I'm sorry. 01:05, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

Aww. And I made a version just to be sure... -_- 01:46, May 15, 2013 (UTC)