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Lioneye (Unknown) ~ For Approval
this is ugly

No, this is actually quite pretty! Smooth out the shading a little overall, though. 01:03, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes 01:08 Wed Apr 25

Define the eye depth and expand the shading on the back on the base of the tail. Also, in --> ear, the ear pink needs to be extended. You have it all the way to the whiskers. I also think the eye postition forr --> side is a little off. Maybe make it more to the left. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 03:31, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

The eyeshine makes it look a little cross-eyed. Also this is beautiful shut your mouth. --

Vary the size/shape of the stripes slightly, as on the app and rogue they differ a little

There's some waste on <-- paw. 13:06, 4/25/2018

re-up this blank be complicated cosmo also i forgot some things upload later

You're welcome :). Also smooth out the shading behind the ears, and define it on the belly and front legs. This looks great! Needletail 🐾 #Litten 23:35, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading as well :3 pretty cat

re-up Thanks <3

I think there's some shading leaking where the tail meets the hind leg. And perhaps define the eye depth? This gorgeous! :D 15:23, April 27, 2018 (UTC)

re-up Aww, thanks!

Smooth out the shading on the base of the tail. Maybe add some shading to the little bit part of the chest that shows underneath the head. Maybe smooth out the shading on the belly and tail? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 13:10, April 28, 2018 (UTC)

re-up will add chest shading later

Dawnpelt (Unknown) ~ For Approval
i was going to put that this was really fun but i realised every single error with it as i hit upload so i'll fix the <<< front paw waste next upload --

Re-uploaded. --

This is beautiful! Can you define and expand the shading? And maybe add some to the belly. Unless you have some there already. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 10:55, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

Expand the earpink in the ---> ear, past the whisker. Define the shading too; you did a nice job on this! 22:22, April 25, 2018 (UTC)

She looks kind of crosseyed.

Re-uploaded. okay so when I uploaded this it FINALLY snapped why the shading was hard to see - I colorpicked the shading from the starclan image when it was probably just black shading, I'm not sure if I'll redo the shading or nah though --

Can you define the shading everywhere and smooth it out as well? Also- maybe expand t on the head towards --> way? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 14:01, April 26, 2018 (UTC)

Could you expand the belly shading? 22:34, April 26, 2018 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ---> ear? 15:24, April 27, 2018 (UTC)

Jagged Peak (ES) ~ For Approval
His other one was the alt- rip. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 03:30, April 28, 2018 (UTC)

I think there should be one or two less stripes on the haunch, and then then other images show that one has a break in the middle^

Re-uploaded. Stripes will be the death of me. Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 15:33, April 28, 2018 (UTC)

Ikr? Anyways smooth out the neck/upper chest shading a bit. <22:52, 4/28/2018> ​

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 01:02, April 29, 2018 (UTC)

Blaze (Lo) ~ For Approval
hm. 00:21, April 29, 2018 (UTC)

Define the facial shading and smooth out the shading on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 00:25, April 29, 2018 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the farthest frong leg?

I love this. There's some waste on th3 stomach. <span style="">01:46, 4/29/2018