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Queen Blanks ~ For Approval
Righty-o. Here we go with the queen blanks. Comment away my friends. ^w^ 09:42 Tue May 28

I'm no expert on this but maybe square up the shape of this --> forepaw and define where the du-claw'd be. I can't really explain how, the but maybe slope the haunch a bit more, it looks kinda flat compared to the shoulders. Gorgeous work, Berry! 22:15, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps ---> this leg could be curved a tad? 22:50 Tue May 28

Maybe you could make both sides of the longhair's tail fluffy? The straight line looks a bit odd. 01:18, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think you could define the top of the nearest shoulder a bit? Also you might disconnect the line on the same shoulder from the head. As is it looks a bit awkward. You also might define the joints a bit more on the other leg and even out the sizes of the ears. Though I doubt you'd need it, if you need a redline feel free to ask. 2:06 Thu May 30 2013

Maybe the tail can be curved a tad more --- no cat's tail is that straight when they walk. 23:22, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, Breezy I wouldn't say no to a redline. xD 06:18 Fri May 31

Re-uploaded meh I did some stuff on the shorthair - decided I'll work on the longhairs later. 12:45 Fri May 31

Maybe slant the toe line on her left front paw the other way, or make it straight up and down? And maybe make a small line over the base of her tail where it joins with her haunch on our left; just to show a little more depth. These are really stunning... 00:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the hind paw a bit more and maybe define the "ankle" of the leg that's just behind the lifted forepaw 01:24, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

How about these? Ignore the face, though. Yours is fine. Except for maybe the sizes of your ears, which should be more even. 15:48 Mon Jun 3 2013

Re-uploaded officially naming these blanks Hannibal because they look like they want to eat you. 08:17 Fri Jun 7

Umm... what happened to these? They look odd. different. 10:26, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps thin and even out the tail lineart a little. 10:33 Sat Jun 8

Re-uploaded. Sorrrel, I was given a redline by Breezy to fix up some anatomy issues. .-. Please do not call my blanks odd, and don't comment unless you're offering critique. 10:45 Sat Jun 8

I'm sorry, Berry. I was just surprised by how different they looked. 12:02, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Don't know if this'll make any sense, but can you make the curve around our front right paw more noticeable? 13:20, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

The hind thigh looks lumpy. Maybe smooth it out a bit more? The tail seems bigger than the body. Also, define the front right paw (the one that is not on the ground). 15:03, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

I'm very confused; when you go to the file for this is shows that it looks more like the original version; here it looks like the redline Breezey gave you. Is the wiki playing up? Just asking. 01:39, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe shorten the whiskers by a few pixels, make the tail a bit thinner and maybe shrink her front paws and her right (her right) back paw a just a little. 16:28, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

The bottom of the tail on <--- this side looks like it has an extra line on it, the front part of the belly (or chest?) doesn't look like it connects to the belly smoothly, and the shape of the paws look...off? to me. I don't really know how to explain it, but something about the digits on the paws seem to be throwing me off. 00:49, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Berry? 18:28, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yes- sorry for the lack of re-uploads, I've not had access to a computer. The line on the tail, Ivy, is a bit of fur and I'll keep it unless someone else says otherwise. and the Hannibal eyes stay eheheheh 07:35 Fri Jun 14

Possibly smoothen the lineart on the back? (there's like a little place where it rises :P) 12:21, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:08 Sat Jun 15

Smooth out the hind food and make the actual part that touches the ground smaller and less bulbous. 4:14 Sat Jun 15 2013

Re-uploaded 04:17 Sat Jun 15

Thin the tail more. 10:22, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I'd like to keep the tail as it is unless someone else agrees. 14:33 Sat Jun 15

Can you make the legs and paws a bit thinner too? 15:40, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. 16:18, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Can you taper the end of the tail a bit more at the tip and the lifted paw looks a little too splayed 00:28, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel. If you think about a real cat, the tail gets thinner at the tip. It does not look that way now - and these are the short-hair blanks after all. I do not want to sound rude. Please don't shoot me! 02:26, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Shorten whiskers by a few pixels? 18:44, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the hind paw just a tad and thin out the tail like Hawk and Sorrel said? Other than that, these are honestly fine. Thistleflight (talk) 22:51, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

Could you please remove the dots above the head? It's a style thing and doesn't go with the style of any of the blanks we have. And yes, I agree the tail need to be thinned out a ton. It's almost thicker than the legs right now. Make the dew claw stick out less on the front paw, and make the back paw a more defined shape rather than a really smooth kinda soft line that makes it look too round and blobby. Shrink the paws quite a bit too, they're much too big for a cat in comparison to the leg size. Clean up the whisker lineart so it's a bit smoother, and maybe vary the lengths of the whiskers. Lastly, the chest is in front of the legs, so at this angle, the line for the chest should go over the far front leg, rather than the line that shows the leg connecting with the body being in front. Honestly, I thought it was mostly fine before and only needed a few minor tweaks, but... :/

Re-uploaded I tried a thing with the front paw but I can change it back if needed. I had issues with the hind paw...a lot of issues. e.e 10:39 Wed Jun 19

Her front paw that's on the ground is bigger then the others. 14:29, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Her back right paw looks as if it is pointing outward, could you possibly make it so it looks like we're looking at it straight on? Those paws look great already, but if you need a little reference, I found this. Also, on the base of her tail, there's just a little stray line there. And last, could you make that line on the back of her foreleg on her shoulder (one that is lifting up the paw off the ground) straight instead of curving in? <span style="">19:30 Thu Jun 20

The front left leg could be curved a tad more. Also, the lifted front paw should be curved more as well. Also, I find that the queen looks a little scrawny. I hate to sound rude, but honestly, I liked it better the way you had it before, but... x-x 00:35, June 21, 2013 (UTC)

There's some pixels on the part where the (our left) part of her tail meets her body, and they look a bit odd. Like Hawk and Paleh, I preferred the version before, but this is good all the same. 01:45, June 23, 2013 (UTC)

Er, yeah, like Sorrel and Hawk, I liked the ones you made before (your first ones better, I don't want to sound rude). Maybe upload it back and just curve the front paw justa scinch.Thistleflight (talk) 21:57, June 24, 2013 (UTC)

Okay guys I can see you're all hinting at it, but do you want me to just go ahead and bring back the ones I had before and change what's been told? sighs because I much prefer these but I guess majority rules <span style="">06:44 Tue Jun 25 06:44, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Uh, yes, you really should put the original blanks back. Maybe with a few minor adjustments, though. Thistleflight (talk) 22:34, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Well I think it'd be easier on your side with what changes will need to be made to fit style and anatomy with the old blanks. Of course they'd still need a couple tweaks, but I think it'd be easier overall for you. These are still good though, and it's ultimately up to you I believe.

Reverting back to the "original" blanks may be a bit more drastic than need be, especially since you'd basically loose all that progress of getting some aspects of the anatomy, as it is currently, looking well done. Maybe overlay the original and the current version and figure out any extremities that might need fixing with reference from Raelic's redline like the forepaws and the tilt to the back paws. Good job, Berry. 22:55, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

I think you should change back. I'm sure other users would be *Dives behind brick wall* okay  with the decision. It matches the other linearts much better and, like Paleh said, would only need a few more tweaks. Great job on everything Berry! 23:18, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

I do believe Berry gets the point of multiple users preferring her original blanks. I ask that if you're going to comment on the blanks, please comment on what she has uploaded, as the message of a majority of users wanting the other blanks back has very easily been proven. Seriously guys, enough already; she gets the point.

Agreeing with what Cloudy said above; these are the blanks that she has uploaded. Berry prefers these blanks and these are hers to work with and manage. We've already put a lot of effort on these blanks to make them the way they are now, and it seems almost like a waste of that effort to go right back. Both blank styles are beautiful, but like Cloudy said, these are the ones uploaded, and the ones we should be sticking with. I like these ones we have now, but right now isn't the place for opinions, I believe. <span style="">03:06 Mon Jul 1

Reena (Ro) ~ For Approval
My kitty <333 Comments? <span style="">00:35, 02, 07, 2013

This is lovely! Maybe blur where the white meets the orange (not sure what to call that color) on the front leg closest to us? Sha dew  ing!  15:39, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded Thank you 8DDD <span style="">16:35, 02, 07, 2013

Blur the stomach shading a wee bit? She's prettyyyyy 23:36, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Woollytail (Star) ~ CBA
Hello friends 00:48, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading juuuuust a tad? Maybe darken it too, if you want?

Re-uploaded. I also added highlights things we'll see how this goes 02:54, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again cause I didn't like the texture how it was 09:08, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

His naaaaame. ouo CBA?

Sandgorse (Star) ~ CBA
;___; Comments?

Sexy Cloudy 8DDD Define the chest shading a bit? <span style="">02:34, 02, 07, 2013

Re-uploaded. Thank you ouo

I think he needs patches. 09:10, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. ;_;

CBA? 23:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Appledawn (W) ~ For Approval
8DD this is one of my favorite prefixes ever. All colors come from Petalfall (which I thank Mounty heavily for sharing with me). Anyway, comments? ouo Bb  un   legs  00:58, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Removed some waste from highlights. Bb un   legs  01:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the neck shading.

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  02:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps define the stripes a tad? Especially on the tail and legs, they appear to get lost.

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  16:16, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail just a tad and I think this'll be ready. 23:35, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  23:45, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Stagleap (W) ~ For Approval
sexy name is sexy <span style="">01:10 Tue Jul 2

Maybe define the ear pink just a wee bit, I sorta have to squint to see it. 09:01, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back/haunch area a bit. This is really good. Sha dew  ing!  15:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Doespring (W) ~ For Approval
8D <font color="#00CC66">Sho <font color="#66FF99">ond  <font color="33FF99">erp  <font color="#CC99FF">Like nobody’s around~  01:12, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Defien the shading a teeny bit? 08:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- <font color="#00CC66">Sho <font color="#66FF99">ond  <font color="33FF99">erp  <font color="#CC99FF">Like nobody’s around~  13:41, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading and texture a bit on her haunch. 00:31, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <font color="#00CC66">Sho <font color="#66FF99">ond  <font color="33FF99">erp  <font color="#CC99FF">Like nobody’s around~  00:51, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Mistmouse (W) ~ For Approval
Yes this I like 8D <span style="">01:33, 07/2/2013

Define the shading on the tail and legs? Nicely done~

Re-uploaded Done. Thanks, Cloudy~ <span style="">02:46, 07/2/2013

Blur teh neck and haunch shading a little? Lookin good m8 09:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Flailfoot (E) ~ For Approval
Love black cats<333 Also, epic name is epic. And kitty hazel eyes<333 <span style="">02:31, 07/2/2013

Hm...perhaps lighten the base just a tad. 08:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I disagree. I think it looks fine, as-is, and since he /is/ black, a base this dark is pretty good.

Define the shading; I can barely see it. 23:51, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reups <span style="">01:29, 07/3/2013

Sorrelpaw (A) ~ For Approval
What a coincidence!! Comments? :p 06:40, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

There's some waster underneath her paws and back leg. <span style="">09:43 Tue Jul 2

Reuploaded 14:32, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on legs a tad? If not, that's okay. Bb un   legs  14:45, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Personally, I think its fine, but if another person agrees, I'll do it. 14:48, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Just a little bit, Sorrel. Not much.

Reuploaded How's this? 17:21, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Brackenwing (W) - For Approval
Well, trying out Photoshop elements. I like this~ Comments? <span style="">06:50 Tue Jul 2

Re-uploaded, I liked this one better. Plus defined the shading. <span style="">09:36 Tue Jul 2

Blur/smooth out the shading. Very nice. Sha dew  ing!  15:32, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the earpink a bit? 17:53, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Larksplash (A) ~ For Approval
Here Larkpaw/Maia (my Aunt Kathy's cat). I don't really like how she came out. I'll add depth to the eyes soon. Any other comments? 15:53, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added depth to the eyes. 15:57, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

They're waste around the right on the tail, around her head, and near her paws? Remove it? This is pretty cute! Bb un   legs  16:04, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't believe I missed that. Thanks, Beebs. 16:12, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I think the orange is a bit... too bright/neon. Very pretty, Blue! 18:09, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel on that note, but it's not really all that bad. Also, parts of the white are looking very gray.

Reuploaded. Thanks. I dulled the orange and lightened the shading. 18:53, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little too purple. This is incredible! 23:04, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuloaded. Thank you everyone! I don't think changes are showing. 23:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

This appears to be a calico style cat... are calicos and torties the same thing? o.o I always thought they were more like this....also, the colors still seem a little off, especially that orange? Are you color picking from an image of your aunt's cat or something?

Shrewclaw (A) ~ For Approval
First charart in awhile ^^. Hope he's not too dark o3o. 16:26, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail a bit? I can't see it that well, but if you don't want to, cool with me. Nice work, Silver! Bb un   legs  16:29, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I erased a bit of it to make it show up. Does it look like there's a change for you? 16:32, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Mudthorn (W) ~ For Approval


Here he is~ I dunno, is his shading too dark or is it fine? Anyway, comments? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 18:01, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the highlights (or the shading if those aren't highlights). Sha dew  ing!  18:47, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the earpink a bit? <font color="#00CC66">Sho <font color="#66FF99">ond <font color="33FF99">erp  <font color="#CC99FF">Like nobody’s around~  23:40, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The ear in the black looks dark brown, not black. Also, I think that the earpink is fine~ x3 00:29, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Whoops forgot the second ear. Reuploaded  Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 01:44, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

The highlights sort of throw the picture off. Maybe make them less bright? 03:07, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Flamepelt (E) ~ For Approval
Haven't done a charart in ages. That earpink is awful, I know. Comments? Sha dew  ing!  18:18, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

He's ginger, so he needs stripes. ouo This is really nice, though.

Oh. Oops. I'll get on that. Might take a little while. Sha dew  ing!  18:46, July 2, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading a bit too while you're at it? 23:39, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Marshcloud (W) ~ For Approval
Any suggestions for improvement? Splashmist3271 (talk) 20:55, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

If I'm not mistaken, all RiverClan cats are longhairs, unless they are stated to be shorthaired ^^;. Nice work of the stripes! Bb un   legs  20:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Add/define the shading a lot. 21:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, will do! It might be a bit though. Splashmist3271 (talk) 21:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Also, the earpink looks rather solid. Can you blur it just a smidge? 21:40, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes go onto the lineart. Remove, please (I love your tabby style)? 21:47, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I fixed it- is this better? Splashmist3271 (talk) 22:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be defined a ton. And the tail looks rather odd-shaped. 22:36, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I fixed it again. The tail is supposed to look kind of odd because he is described as having a short tail. Splashmist3271 (talk) 23:16, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste along his spine. Thin the tail, and blur the shading a lot. 23:25, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I'll fix the waste, but I'm not sure how to blur the shading without blurring the tabby marks... Anyways, I have to go now, so the edited version probably won't be up until tomorrow. Splashmist3271 (talk) 23:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

What program do you use, Splashmist? 23:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (E) ~ For Approval
My first charart as a warrior! That leg was a pain. The tail may not look normal but trust me, it is. Comments? 23:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could just be my screen, but she looks greenish. x3 Love the texture! 00:28, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit? And maybe the shading along the back and neck area? Very nice! Sha dew  ing!  02:52, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Thank you, all of you. =3 03:03, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Finchkit (Ki) - For Approval
eh, idk about this one. Comments? She was mentioned by Palebird as being ginger like Sandgorse, so I got the colors from Cloudy and tweaked them. x3 00:27, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

This is really good! Maybe just blur the stripes on the legs a little? Sha dew  ing!  02:54, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Thanks! Re-uploaded 02:57, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Plumclaw (W) - For Approval
Yes, I am very well aware there is waste or other stuff that should be fixed. This is one of my better chararts actually (i'm really bad D:) I need all the help I can get, so, comments? My signature is being derpy, I'm fixing it right now. ~Jadeblaze~ (talk) 00:40, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

By the way, I wasn't sure what pelt length she had or what her eye color was, so I made her SH and with green eyes. ~Jadeblaze~ (talk) 00:41, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Don't worry about the eye color and such. She looks a bit pixelated in places and there are white dots all over her. Also, define the shading and the earpink just a tad. 03:05, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Shrewclaw (W) - For Approval
Shrewclaw~ This is my first project, so go easy on me. Any problems? I can redo them to your standards. Comment away! Darkfrost14 (talk) 01:53, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading, define the eye depth, and remove the stripes, to match the apprentice. Bb un   legs  01:20, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

There, I blurred the shading, got rid of the stripes, and fixed the eye. I put the apprentice and the warrior side by side and they looked alike. What do you all think? Darkfrost14 (talk) 01:53, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

In the morning/when I can I'll give you the color codes for everything to make sure they match, since I'm not on the computer right now. 02:03, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

I made sure the colors were correct with gimp, by taking the apprentices colors and putting them on the warrior. But you can double check in the morning if you wish. o3o Darkfrost14 (talk) 02:08, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Sha dew  ing!  02:53, July 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define/Add the shading. 03:06, July 3, 2013 (UTC)