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Clawface (Ro) ~ CBA
I found a spot! Yay, first charart up in a while. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 23:03, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Are there scars? I can't quite tell. If not, add them. 8D 23:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Is there a light part along his back? If so, make it brighterr Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Take the earpink from his warrior (if you did, take it directly from the center). If you did that...then just disregard this x3 05:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   May the odds be ever in your favor 11:14, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could be my computer (I'll try looking at this from a different one later) but could you make the earpink a little more pink? Blur where the back highlight meets thhe shading to smooth it out. Nice job ^^ 13:06, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the scars pink to match his warrior? And what Ivyshell said. This is beautiful! 19:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 20:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scars brighter and maybe more red. They're kinda hard to see.... 21:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Nice. 11:28, 11, 04, 2012

Does it look a bit green to anyone else? It looks kind of green to me. 23:37, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

You're not the only one, Cinder. Not sure if it looks like that to any others, but could you (maybe) get rid of the (possible) green-ish tint? 08:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the color looks like the warrior but the warrior's shading is brown tinted so just make the shading a reddish brown color instead of black, keep the base coat the same. 15:40 Thu Apr 12

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  22:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm... blur the shading a tad. 23:05, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it any more. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  10:54, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars some more, they're very difficult to see  19:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the whole image a bit. 00:57, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  22:16, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 15:52 Sat Apr 21

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  16:12, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

He looks really yellow to me... Up the brown a little? 01:40, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:17, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars a bit. 20:26, 23, 04, 2012

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:41, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading a bit. 20:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think that tail scar could be there, cause it's like, fur. Just move it up a tad and make it curve more. Skt ANZAC day  22:41, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste around the image. If I'm looking at the correct version that is... 06:28, 27, 04, 2012

I don't think you are, because there is none. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  16:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think there's waste around it too... Blur the tail shading and thicken/blur the tail scar. 18:05, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Still working, Purple? 21:20, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  11:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading 21:05, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading's fine. CBA? 23:18, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dodge (Ro)~ For Approval
My first charart. Comments? If the picture isnt showing, its here. ~Fallen 23:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nice for your first charart. ^^ Blur the body shading a bit and slightly define the stripes. 11:22, 11, 04, 2012

Define the stripes they are hard to see 12:18, April 11,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stripes defined and shading blurred more. Thanks, DJ :3 --~Fallen 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This is pretty for a first. Define the earpink at the tips? 22:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image has a yellow-green hue. Fix that? 23:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look yellow-green to me ._. 15:41 Thu Apr 12

I think it just looks yellow... Tone down the highlights(?) a bit. 00:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ear pink. I did`nt use any layers, so I darkened the main color. --~Fallen 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 01:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading, since I didnt have highlights, and blurred earpink a bit more. --~Fallen 03:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose a little bit. It looks a little neon to me :P 17:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think if you darken or make the base color less yellowish, this could be just about 80% done, in my opinion. 03:18, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Well, I don't know much about this but it's been over a week since Fallen's last upload, so I decided to take over. Comments? 04:48, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

According to my clock, it hasn't been over a week...A few more hours. 05:01, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wiki time for me is 5:02 05:07, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's been over a week, so this can stay. Lighten the earpink a bit to make it look less hot pinkish, there's waste under his belly, and I see a slash on his chest and his front leg farthest away from us, is that supposed to be there? And tone down the highlights a tad. 15:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think that slash thing maybe part of the stripes. Can you define the shading a little more? 15:53 Sat Apr 21

There is some waste in between the back left thigh and the under belly, Looks great! :3 -- 20:36, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the striping pattern. I might need to blur it some though :/ 15:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please do. They're too sharp-edged, imho.

Define the shading ;3 20:06, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a lot. And it looks like they're on top of the highlights. Darken and define the shading as well. 19:00, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. If you're using layers I would suggest putting the shading layer on top of the stripes layer. o3o 20:21, 23, 04, 2012  20:21, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know there's a lot of waste Dx please cdoment on something other than that, and I know the eyes and ears are missing too... I'll reupload soon this afternoon. 13:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's supposed to be named like Dodge.rogue.png So, basically, get rid of the extra .png =3 13:34, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but those don't look like stripes....try looking at the tutorials for stripe ideas.

Tons of waste around the art. Color in the eye and the nose. Add earpink. 00:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I know there is waste, and I specifically asked if you would not comment on that since I stated I already knew about it and would be cleaning it up. 03:59, April 25, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded That's better. I'll get the earpink and waste later 12:55, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's white specks on the tail, and the whole thing looks a little green. 16:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

define the earpink c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:05, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but after discussing with another SM, we've agreed that this isn't 80% complete. You have a week to get this 80% done or it will be declined. Also, there's waste around the image, blurred lineart, and the stripes are triangle tabby stripes. Please fix that. 00:38, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the shading some. 00:21, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? 05:20, 30, 04, 2012

Yes 05:25, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reupload it then. 12:29, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Been practicing "Mountain tabbies" on my parents' computer, so hopefully this'll at least look decent. I looked at a picture of a real cat when I made this. 14:53, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks mottled, please fix that. And I can't quite tell through the "mottles" but it doesn't look that much like a tabby right now.... it may after you get rid of them, I don't know. 15:02, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll change it if someone agrees with you, because it doesn't really look like mottles to me. 19:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't, per se, but I think it's the grey underneath. He's just a brown tabby, so let's keep him that way, 'kay? There's also waste all around. 19:34, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks gray cause of the highlights. I'll fix it c: 19:46, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the stripes look like lines, and a bit mottled, I agree with Paleh. Please fix that. 00:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit too. 11:16, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry; 'reuploaded trying a new pattern since the last one didn't look much like stripes... I'll revert if you disagree but I think this one's better. 12:59, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
She was decipted as a gray she cat with thin fur in Secrets of The Clans. Comments? 03:46, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular and blur it a lot. Darken and define the shading as well.

Reuploaded Toned down earpink 03:53, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

If it's thin fur, shouldn't it be shorthaired? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  04:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I would think so...

You need to have a cite for this description in the trivia on Bluestar's page before you can make this. And there must be no question as to whether or not the cat in the image is Bluestar. In any case, if memory serves, most of the images in that book were grayscale anyway, and most didn't have captions explaining which cat was which. Declining unless you can provide the citation. 04:41, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it wasn't a picture. Snowfur said something about her sister having thin gray fur in that story about Mosskit. Secrets of the clans, Page 77. No pictures, it specifically said she had thin gray fur. 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

And I put a cite on the page before I made this. 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

The cite was verified before she even had the image reserved. I checked myself. Changing heading back to "For Approval", since it was talking about Bluefur, and it had nothing to do with a picture.

Blur the earpink, and make it less orange/reddish. 19:59, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:31, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still blur the earpink. 10:20, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:35, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Nice Ivy 08:12, 23, 04, 2012

I don't know if it's just me but it seems that where the shading meets the highlights it looks blotchy. Blur it a bit please, unless anyone disagrees. 02:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I dunno if it's my browser, but it seems fine to me. 22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it does look a bit blotchy to me too. Skt ANZAC day  23:00, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Mossy like. X3 Blur the shading. 00:30, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

It seems fine to me as well, however I would encourage you to blur and lighten the earpink. 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think that we decided that Bluestar and all other bluish-gray cats wouldn't get alts. for being described as gray because blue is the scientific word for gray. Look at the talk page. 17:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Though it's looking like the plain gray alts will be declined, yes, it's not decided yet Bluestar. 20:51, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this?-- 21:49, April 29, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Yes I am, thank you very much. Reuploaded 23:00, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and enlarge the haunch and shoulder highlights. 23:34, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 00:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more gray. 07:39, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:48, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Just take a blur tool and blur the earpink...it's really hard-edged right now. 22:06, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:08, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

You blurred some of the ear lineart instead of the earpink.... :S 22:19, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded that all? 03:34, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Ro) ~ CBA
x.x Alright. So, I tried to match her as well as I could to her kittypet image, I hope I named the file and headline right, sorry if I didn't. Criticism welcome! :3 05:14, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Realized I made her to creamyish so I made her a bit pinker like her kittypet image. And I added/tweaked a few things. -- 05:28, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a lot. Nice job Raven~ 07:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Beautiful!-- 10:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

You named it wrong, please renamed it Violet.rogue.png and usually when you take over a project you take over their spot, you don't start a new one but its fine for now. 12:01, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and lighten the stripes a tad. And renamed the heading "Violet (Ro) ~ For Approval" Good job. 12:04, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Wild, you don't always have to take over another user's spot. I just forgot to archive the old one because I was tired last night and never did it before I went to sleep.

Make the earpink a little more red. Lovely~ o3o 14:06, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Made the earpink redder, renamed the file, blurred the shading, lightened the stripes a tad, smudged the stripes. Hope it looks better! -- 18:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded just tried to match her earpink color and pelt color more to her kittypet image. -- 19:04, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

waste around the image~ -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:43, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shouldn't be anymore waste. -- 20:22, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry. I didn't see that trivia point when I looked. 02:28, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Huh, Shelly? Blur the shading along the back the tinniest tiniest bit ever~ It can be your choice, though =3 02:49, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Y'know, it could be my computer, but the earpink looks like it doesn't fill up the whole ear on the left side. Also, define it a little (make it more pink) 02:54, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the earpink color should be fixed. -- 19:37, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little neon. Could you tone it down? o3o 17:26, 22, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Toned the earpink down :3 -- 19:09, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and round out the shoulder shading. Breeze whisker  19:56, April 22, 2012 (UTC)\

Re-uploaded -- 20:01, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

I see waste all around it. o3o 20:09, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Though I think it's just my computer -.- 20:15, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry! I forgot to get rid of it. -- 01:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Add white to the chest. 04:54, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added white to the chest. -- 12:48, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Attention Ok. So I woke up to find my lap top would Not Turn On. It still isn't working, so It might have to be sent in, and so they normally whipe the computer.. So that means I basically lost the .xcf file for Violet.. I Really hope it looks good enough to be approved. Really sorry. -- 01:47, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. After being 99% sure we would have to send my lap top in, it turned on, and I emailed myself the .xcf, so the .xcf is Not gone. -- 19:54, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading. Skt ANZAC day  22:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading, if I blur it anymore it will disappear xD -- 00:00, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think it necessarily needs blurring, but I would define the lighting on the haunch and chest and tone down the flank/back shading. 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tried to define the shading more. -- 04:37, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smooth out that shading some more, if not, do what 'Teldy said. :3 08:26, 26, 04, 2012

x.x If you guys want, I can put the shading layer to full opacity, take a screenshot and show you guys that I can't really make it anymore smooth/blurred etc, if I do it will just kind of fade away xD -- 09:29, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more pink-- 14:58, April 26, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Moonshine, the earpink is already really pink. Raven, try tinting the shading a warm color. 22:13, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want Raven? I could try to help if you need it. ;) 01:39, 28, 04, 2012

No, but thank you Very much, I think i'll just redo the shading xD -- 07:03, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you So much, I think it helped a lot, and I think it looks a lot better, hope it does! -- 07:17, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading, and can you try to make some of the stripes a bit paler so that it matches the other images? 18:02, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I just decided to do the stripe pattern over again, and with a lighter more red color to match her kittypet image, Hope it looks better! -- 00:14, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading. <span style="">05:12, 30, 04, 2012

And darken the earpink 05:15, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded darkened and defined shading, and darkened earpink a bit. -- 10:34, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading, there's waste around the whole image, and I think theres blurred lineart in the ear. 10:53, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded cleared waste, and blurred shading. -- 11:07, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the ear, and motion blur the stripes by 1 pixel (if you've got the motion blur option) 09:18, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, the earpink Should be filling the ear where the earpink is supposed to go, maybe its still to light and it looks like its not. and I do have the motion blur but when I set both the dial things to 1 I don't think it made a difference at all, at least none I could see, sorry. I still don't know how to work Gimp entirely. I'm considering getting a mentor. -- 10:18, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

smudge the stripes more. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  13:08, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I smudged the stripes and used motion blur, I set the dial things to 1 if thats what you mean by one pixel Dazzle, Hope it looks better! :3 -- 23:12, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Look's great! Mounty tabbies are hard to match. 8D CBA? 23:19, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Boulder was shown as a solid light gray tom on pg. 76 of The Rise of Scourge. Comments for improvement? 13:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink and enlarge the earpink as well. Also rename this  13:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploded Also, why don't you rename it. I don't know how. 13:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Because she's not an admin. It's not that difficult. Go into whatever program you use, choose "Save AS", and name it "Boulder.warrior.alt.png" and when you upload it to the Wiki, it will be named that. 13:50, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Sort of) just renamed the file with a new image. 13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. 14:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smooth it out so it's not so blotchy. 18:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes might not be showing. 19:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink more. 20:21, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. <span style="">02:21, 21, 04, 2012

Also blur the earpink. 20:55, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. It might be just me, but it looks like they're rectangle-y. Spark Love me some chocolate~! ♥ 22:02, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really hate blurring. 16:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. <span style="">20:23, 23, 04, 2012 20:23, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading? c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:53, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still really hate blurring. 19:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

You may not like blurring, but blur the shading more. :3 00:33, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. <span style="">02:36, 25, 04, 2012

Reuploaded I can't blur the shading or highlights anymore. 18:12, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks a little blotchy. Blur it more if you can, or redo it. 20:46, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a little as well. 07:46, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink more. <span style="">08:19, 26, 04, 2012

Reuploaded 17:20, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:06, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it bigger.-- 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the shading, its really hard to see. 23:58, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 16:55, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Center, enlarge and make the earpink more triangular. Define the haunch highlight, and there is some waste between the legs. 19:24, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, make it more triangular, and make it more pink instead of dark purple. 21:51, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. 16:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the face "highlight" 20:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the highlights. <span style="">10:08, 02, 05, 2012


 * And blur the earpink's edges. <span style="">10:12, 02, 05, 2012

Center the earpink a bit more too. 00:48, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the haunch and stomach highlights.

Reuploaded 14:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Again. Forgot to center earpink and the head highlight seemed too light. 15:08, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define it.
 * What I mean is make the shading easier to see, like by darkening it, but blur the edges of it so it's not so blotchy.

Hmm, Just a suggestion, but how I make shading easier, I make a new layer, I use paintbrush or pencil, I draw the shading in pure white and full opacity and then blur it, and then set the layers opacity to whatever level looks best, and it makes it easier to work with. -- 23:19, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Antpelt (Ro) ~ For Approval
Since we are redoing the Dark Forest cats as rogues, I chose Antpelt. Any comments for improvements? 11:04, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

sharpen the scars and thin them out a little bit -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:59, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  14:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yay! Antpelt is awesome x3 Blur the tail shading and define the scars. 21:36, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  10:03, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading, and I think the sideways scars should extend down the back more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt ANZAC day  10:06, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did what Trolly told me to do. XD   <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...   11:07, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

He needs more horizontal scars. 01:52, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  13:25, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:07, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lightened shading <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 08:53, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. <span style="">03:42, 28, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Defined the shading. <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 05:15, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly/haunch shading. 17:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the belly/hunch shading <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 08:24, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'm actually going to CBA this one. :3 <span style="">04:59, 30, 04, 2012

Sorry but the two patches of scars are too close and they need blurred some. 00:39, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 06:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink if any. <span style="">10:06, 02, 05, 2012

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 11:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

What happened to his black ear? 11:14, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the shading on his paws, it looks like he has darker paws owo -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:42, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a black ear, define the nose color and desatuare and define the earpink. 17:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar, please don't repeat things that have already been said. Blur the shading. 19:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Bluestar, I am keeping the earpink because it came from his Warrior image. <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 07:03, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink from his warrior isn't as neon. Change it, please.

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 09:23, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some. <span style="">10:57, 04, 05, 2012

Tawnypelt (W. Alt4) - For Approval
Dang, she has about as many alts as Daisy :P Alright, I have my reasons for this. For one, I believe that she has been described as a dark tortoiseshell, and a dark tortoiseshell and a pale tortoiseshell are two totally different pelt colors. A pale, or dilute, tortie consists of blue, cream, and white hairs, while dark torties are black and dark ginger or even brown. Secondly, when I was reading, it said something along the lines of "he could see her pale fur crouching in the undergrowth", meaning that her fur must have been pretty light to stand out against the shadows. She gets this alt, in my eyes. I feel that I should probably either lighten the shading or the fur effect some and define some of the dapples on her cream patches, you guys agree? 00:36, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Um... blur the earpink. I'm speechless, this it beautiful. 00:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink, it looks too neon. 01:05, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure whether it'd be a pale tortie or just a pale solid color, as it's only mentioned pale. But whichever it is, she'd get an alt of some kind. Lighten the gray a tad. Lovely job~ 01:42, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erm... that other image is just a tortie and white, otherwise known as a pale tortie... saturated blue as a photograph (as in the entire photo is saturated blue, it has gray fur, not blue)... and Tawnypelt already has a tortie and white alt... And maybe the passage in the book was describing her lighter patches of brown fur? I'm sorry, the image is lovely, but she already has an alt for this. I believe it should be declined, unless someone can convince me otherwise. -- 01:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

In any case, we don't have a cite for Tawnypelt being a dark tortie. And she's been described and depicted as pale enough times that I'm lobbying to change her to a tortie and white. 02:03, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

The dark tortie picture you showed looks kinda like a brindled tortoiseshell to me :/ just throwing that out there... 21:16, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Scratch that. Can you define the shading a little more? 21:18, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading. 23:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) ~ CBA
Comments?

Blur the flank shading. 01:36, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the tail. 01:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hate tail shading on short-haired cats.

Nice job Cloud!! Just thin the scars out just a bit. 02:07, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Well, if I thin out the scars, they won't match the leader as well. I tried making them thinner when I first made it, and they didn't look real good. I'd prefer to keep them like this.

This may just be my lap top, but the scars look a bit neon, and blur the scars at the elbow and neck, Looks Wonderful! Again, it could totally be my lap top. -- 06:53, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. They're not neon. I took the colors right from his leader image.

Lighten the black paws, as I can't see the lineart too clearly. =3 Looks epic! 23:21, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.<font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws  23:21, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 01:00, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (Lo) - For Approval
Mwahahaha mine again! :3 Comments? 02:13, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon. It's the 7th already? :/ 02:17, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's the same as her deputy. We've reached the slow season... 02:19, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ivyshell, I don't know what you're whining about. Woo had this reserved, not you. Her reservation ran out, not yours. Sorry, but I gotta say that. >.>

I'm sorry; I was just wondering. And, I wasn't trying to be a nuisance. 12:19, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowflight (Lo) ~ For Evaluation
My First! Comments?<sup style="color:red">♘ Duck <sup style="color:teal">Splash <sup style="color:red">♞ 04:32, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think he gets a loner image. He's a rogue. 04:46, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

But he followed Honeyleaf, so he gets a loner<sup style="color:red">♘ Duck <sup style="color:teal">Splash <sup style="color:red">♞ 05:16, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

There looks to be little or no shading. Add or define shading <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 07:45, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, he would get one. Honeyleaf has a loner image for the same reasons. He was one of the SkyClan cats that left with her. If she gets one, so does he. _-_

I fixed the heading, as Ducksplash is a kit. Fix the eye and earpink so that the lineart isn't covered by colors. 08:20, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dazzle, in the future, let the leads handle the heading, okay? 10:28, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink 10:43, May 4, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Erase the waste in the back and at the front of the head. 10:56, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. And blur the shading lots 12:16, May 4, 2012 (UTC)