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Apple Blossom (A) ~ For Approval
Wow, her pattern's hard to match. I really like how Wrenflight turned out, so I'm doing another sharp shading style. Comments? 03:22, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:24, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:29, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

make the stripes flow more with the body shape. For example, the stripe on her front leg is just a straight line across when it should be curved.

Proud of you on how many images you got done^ Maybe ask Snowed for her warrior or kit 07:50, 6/29/2017

I'd gladly give Shy the file, but keep in mind that I only use Photoshop and have no way to convert .psd files to anything else.

Maybe give her the hex codes for the textures and colors prehaps? They seem a bit off. 10:40, 6/29/2017

Actually, no, they really don't. They're not really all that far off and considering Shy and I shade differently, I'd say the colors match well enough. The only two things that really don't here are the stripes and the unsmudged white.

Expand the white on the chest a little bit? I feel like we would see more of the chest at this angle than on the warrior. 13:56, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded my email isn't the fastest thing to load too, so... 17:25, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

You're doing such a good job with your characters, Shy! This is one of your best ones so far. Anyways, define the lighting on -> leg closest to us? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 20:36, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 20:43, June 29, 2017 (UTC)

Soften the stripes a tad 11:14, 6/30/2017

I think the stripes should be thinner on ---> front leg? 13:19, June 30, 2017 (UTC)

Shy, if you'd like (and if you don't mind waiting until Saturday), I would be more than willing to make you a guide of sorts as to what the stripes would look like using her other images. If you'd rather do it yourself, that's totally fine. I know her pattern isn't the easiest thing on the earth.

Reuploaded If you can that would really help, thanks. :) 22:36, June 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again 04:10, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the face and chest a tad? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:17, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:43, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

The shading cuts off really sharp on the > eartip - can you cover that with shading, or smooth it out? :)

Reuploaded :) 02:39, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

Okay, I have a bit of a problem... my laptop, where the files for this set were, decided to take a dump and for some reason, I lost half of my files in the folder where I kept this. =/ I'm sorry about that. Maybe just add an extra stripe to the elbow/arm and blur or smudge these ones a bit. They match fairly well, honestly.

Reuploaded That's fine, computers do that a lot especially if they're refurbished. :P 17:24, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

Thin the tail stripes a bit

Also maybe reduce white around eyes, I don't think they go up that far on either of the other images

Reuploaded 19:07, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin stripes more and reduce white around eyes, it looks the same

Reuploaded 23:54, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on both farthest legs, and define the shading depth on the chest area?

Reuploaded 00:11, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Lilystem (Star) ~ For Approval
Weird how I'm even less active now than when I had school... Anyways the stripes don't look right but I'm not sure how to make them better sooo help

Define face shading? 01:12, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Well, I think some of the stripes are a little thicker on the other images, for one thing. Also, I think the eyes look a bit grey compared to the other images. 01:12, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere, lots. :D 01:14, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hmm I think stripes look better now

Thin the tail dorsal stripe a lil' - the warrior is the first in the set, and it looks thinner on that

Define the eye depth a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 03:24, July 1, 2017 (UTC)chat

Define tail and leg shading? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:27, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lol I only saw Spooky's comment so I'll reupload in a minute

Reuploaded Hmmm

nicely matched! however, in respect to the shading, the image looks a little 2d rn- which can be fixed by expanding the shading area literally everywhere on this image 03:54, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, shading expanded

ok the problem with the shading is that you basically shaded the entire outline. It doesn't honestly have a light source. remove some shading from the left/right depending on where you want your light source to be.

Reuploaded Okaay I cleaned it up but I'm pretty sure it's fine? Source is pretty much straight on, but if you still think it has problems then I'll redo it

i do believe the light source was a problem previously, but now it looks fine overall- it's just inconsistent on the head and the back. on the rest of the body, the light appears to be coming from the top left side, therefore the shadow should fall on the right side of the head. in addition, there also should be less to no light on the back (along the spine, i mean) because the light should be visible there unless the light is coming from a really low angle, which it doesn't look to be, observing the shadow on the head and the paws. TLDR, i suggest you to swap the head shading around and remove the shadow along the spine of the image for consistency in light source. 09:18, July 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok I left some shading on the back just because that's the other side of the cat, and I'm not sure if I added enough shading to the right side of the face so lemme know

Define the shading on the legs?

Reuploaded 

Reuploaded Again because the tail was annoying me

Gonna second a past comment here - can you define the light on the back? I'm pretty sure it'd be in the light with this source. Also, I think the facial shading could be expanded a little

Expand tail shading and leg shading a wee bit? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 23:40, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I reduced the back shading and lightened it, but the image looks really flat without it and besides, it is the other side of the cat, which I really believe would not be in the light

Define the shading. Overall, this is a very nice image. 07:26, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks!

Wolfstep (W) - CBA
this sucks  11:15, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading. those stripes are neat. 11:28, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the white tail tip?

Re-uploaded - uploading an image then forgetting that you did  18:21, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on all legs

Can you make the pupil stand out more? I'm having a hard time seeing it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 16:40, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  18:46, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Strikestone (K) - For Approval
i'd appreciate it if nobody commented on the highlights, ill get to em (As well as any comments relating to it matching the other images, its the highlights and as i mentioned previously, ill fix them) 13:45, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

reup so i didnt solve the problem and i made it look more ugly heh... 13:54, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

Do you want the .psd for the warrior or my rendering of the kit? Some of the colors are deceiving. <span style="">14:00 Sun Jul 2

the file would be appreciated if i end up continuing with this image or just for future reference lol :] it'd be great if u could send it to qwert123d@yahoo.com. thanks man 14:31, July 2, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry, but until they get the file, the stripe color looks off.

I sent the files. Give Burnt some time on it. The warrior has a ton of layers to get through. <span style="">12:21 Wed Jul 5

reup  my emails not working f its china's stupid interent that cant agree with ANYTHING but 163 and baidu. so i might just reuploaded anyway in case i never recieve it- if i do ill upload accordingly. @homosneksual what do you mean? i dont necessarily need the file to match the colors or complete an image... ? it helps? but? 13:50, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

lol im dumb i had the reup tab open next to me as i was typing the message above then i forgot i didnt upload and closed the tab later xd. anyway i FINALLY logged into my email (sorry man its not one i check often) and fixed up a lot of things i didnt have on the kit <Small>holy shit that was more complicated than i thought... 14:52, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I ask that we do not swear on the wiki. Can you define the shading on the paws? 01:13, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

hh done 03:26, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The white looks more like it's on the chest, but he's described with a white belly.

reup the stuff on the chest is the color of his pale parts. i didnt have white on the belly tho so i added it 03:48, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (WC) (Star) - For Approval
Why the hell isn't the image showing up..? Well this was fun to do. <span style="">16:10 Sun Jul 2

Here he is. Since the image isn't showing up. <span style="">16:15 Sun Jul 2

Wikia's being a butt with images. Also, is it just me, or do his images look... more yellow than creamy brown?

I noticed that while I was working on it. There's a highlight, but the colors are more like a pale ginger. Want me to put the elder up for a tweak and adjust the colors? <span style="">16:21 Sun Jul 2

If you wouldn't mind, I would greatly appreciate it. It wouldn't be fair to you if all of your comments on this image are about the coloring when all you're doing is trying to match another image. =P

Changes Here Let me know if I need to wait for the elder to be tweaked first and I'll revert the colors back. <span style="">16:46 Sun Jul 2

Yeah, you'll have to wait, especially because there's a chance that it couldn't pass, and I think since Berry would be tweaking it, you should let her decide on the colors.

Rushtooth (W) ~ For Approval
I'm having trouble uploading these images now...anywho, here's Rushtooth! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:17, July 3, 2017 (UTC)\

Can you lighten the shading on the stripes or define them?

'''Re-uploaded. '''If it isn't showing, here. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:48, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the --> side of the tail

The stripes and base color of the df look lighter

I have the file for the df, so they're pretty much right. Unless Sunjaw thinks otherwise or anyone else? I can try color picking again to make sure they're right. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:49, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

The stripe color's fine, but the the base does seem darker. :) Mind sharping the tail stripes a tad?   04:00, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. I know there's some differences between the appearance of layer settings in PS and Sai but this looks the same. I gave Cosmo the file and the colors all came from that. <span style="">18:12 Tue Jul 4

Re-uploaded. Hope I got everything? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:27, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the closest front leg?

There's shading there, it's just the pale part which makes it blend in, but I'll try. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:02, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:33, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Raven Pelt (W) ~ CBA


Define texture

Reuploaded

Are you sure this is supposed to have texture? I know the es has texture but it doesn't look like the rogue does.. also this looks too light imo

Reuploaded That's about as dark as it can get to pure black, unless I start tinting the texture. Also, I'm positive the rogue has texture, because if you screen lighten that whole image to get a better look, it's fairly visible..

CBA? 17:16, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Falcon Swoop (Q) - CBA
14:05, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

This is pretty Patch <3 The stripes seem softer on the sharpclaw, so prehaps soften them a little. Also, I think I'm seeing texture on the sharpclaw lol <span style="">16:54, 7/03/2017

Re-uploaded. thanks 20:00, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smudge/blur the tail tip more? And maybe reduce texture opacity a lil I don't think it's as noticeable on sharpclaw (though maybe I just can't see texture idk)

Re-uploaded. 03:29, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 17:17, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Polly (Ki) ~ For Approval
Okay so I didn't know I even had Photoshop, and then Snowed gave me the file, and I have zero idea how to get the colors so oopsies. wow that's a looooot of layers snowed how do you even keep track

idk man I just do. it must be magic. also, define the texture.

re-up changes if needed.

Stripes look thicker/more dense on kittypet, and thin out the M on the forehead a little

So, what do you want me to do about the stripe issue? keep in mind that this is a kit image, so stripes are obviously going to be thinner and smaller. Also, seeing as these blanks are in different positions. . . you get the point. Not asking for a second opinion. . . just asking Snowfall to clarify.

Know you're not asking for another opinion, but I know these blanks are a pain in the ass to match designs with, and sometimes you gotta cram tons of stripes into one place. I think it's fine.

The only reason I even mentioned the stripes was because on the kittypet there's more dark brown than light brown showing but I get that it's a small blank and a different angle. Though I still think the M should be more thin if you can make it that, and smooth out the top -> side of the M as well. Lastly, define shading depth a tad?

re-up I'm hesitant to do this, because I don't want it to be too red.

The "M" stripe on the kittypet image has a much more defined shape and is less curved, if that makes sense? Nice image. 18:42, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes should be smudged a bit.

Deerpaw (TC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Finally finished with my exams 16:50, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the texture a little? Also, dunno if you need them, but I have the files for both the kit and apprentice should you want them :)

Ooh congrats, I hope you did well on them. Anyways could you lighten the shading a little and smooth it out on her/his shoulder?

Define the earpink in --> ear Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, July 4, 2017 (UTC)chat

Re-ups I did well,now i just dont know what to do with the free time :D 21:22, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Add some shading to the <-- ear, just so it's not completely flat? This is pretty :^0

Re-ups Thanks 20:36, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Houndleap (W) ~ For Approval
It's not letting me see it, so here 18:12, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 23:38, July 3, 2017 (UTC)

The texture is too thick and overblurred. Perhaps sharpen it?

I think the texture should be darker too

I honestly did a terrible job when I made the df, but I can say that the texture's color looks about right, and should only be thinned and sharpened a bit (plus you have the file I sent, so I'm sure you'd have just gotten the colors from that)

Reups 17:48, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit on the front leg closest to us. 18:39, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 03:46, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Herein lies the image that depicts the story of a protagonist who tried again again and again but it still ended in a tragedy

Define shading depth on flank? 02:29, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

hello. please define the shading depth on that ear. jk everywhere 03:05, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 才不会呢！！

Hmm this might just be me, but the tail stripes kinda look like texture, could you try to make them curve and twist more? I hope you know what I mean

Re-uploaded They're like that on her other images, so I didn't honestly change it that much.

Define the eye depth 20:18, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The eye depth is fine; not sure why people are obsessed with having eyes be super super defined with coloring, but it's getting a bit nitpicky. You can clearly see there is variation in color here, which meets the requirements for the project.

Foxy (Ki) - For Approval
This is like, actually disgusting. I tried something weird with the shading, and I might just redo the shading entirely :^))

This is very beautiful! Maybe define the shading everywhere, especially on the face? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 23:24, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the white on the two front paws more? Your kit images are amazing, Snek. :) 23:28, July 4, 2017 (UTC)

reups I'm yelling y'all are so nice thank you

Define the shading on the tail a little bit? 16:17, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

reups

Fernpaw (TAQ) (K) - For Approval
I'm assuming grey tabby Fernpaw is the one I'm supposed to do. Also tried smudged shading... I think I did good. 01:12, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful! One of your best works so far! Define the earpink in --> ear and lighten the shading some on the body on --> side? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:16, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dis is so cute! Can you make the shading cover more of the chest? I'm pretty sure there would be shading there. (As for which image you should make it's very confusing, because it says she's a gray tabby, but the alt is a gray tabby and *shrug*)

Yeah, looks like you did the right one, the images must be mixed up. Smooth the shading on -> paw

Reuploaded 14:09, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on <-- leg? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 14:39, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:15, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Snail Shell (A) ~ For Evaluation
I really am proud of this, hope you like it. PepperPiper11 (talk) 18:24, July 5, 2017 (UTC) This is great, Pepper. Define the shading and shading depth. 18:30, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add some smaller speckles, kind of like the kit has? This is beautiful.

Smooth out the shading on the furthest hind leg? 18:41, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Purdy! Add some shading to <-- ear and define the earpink in --> ear? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 18:43, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks everyone! PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:07, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think the colors are off a little, because when I was making the warrior, Skye told me that the kit is based off Ashfur's colors

Reuploaded  I did use highlights, that might be the reason why, but I did colorpick the colors again. ^^ PepperPiper11 (talk) 19:28, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

You did a good job for your first image! Define the earpink in the -> ear. Any chance I could get a picture of the image of the image without the highlights? If the white are the highlights, then I would say tone them down a little bit. 19:47, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to match the kit's. I also suggest colorpicking from the kit, as it is the first one in the set. :) This is really good, Pepper, you've got a lot of artistic talent, considering this is your first charart. 20:11, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Dull the highlights, as it looks like it's throwing off the coloring. The kit is the first one in this set, as Shypaw said.

Reuploaded Thanks, Shypaw! I colorpicked from the kit, and deleted the highlights. PepperPiper11 (talk) 13:46, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the spots look a little too big, and try smudging them

Reuploaded 15:40, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch a little bit? 18:48, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

SNAILS anyway you should try and soften the spots and make them more round (they look too pointy rn) to match the other images. in addition, i think there are also less spots on the other images :] 00:43, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (Ki) - For Approval
I did colorpick from the loner; if the colors look off, it's because of the differences in shading style. 18:34, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define ear pink and facial shading? Pretty! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 18:44, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:49, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think the stripes right under the eyes extend too far but that's really minor and other than that this looks like it matches well :)

Re-uploaded. 13:09, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (Ki) - For Evaluation
Hi! This is my first charat for an actual canon cat. This is only my fourth charart ever so it's probally not so good. Also, could someone add me to the  character art project as a kit? I'm exited for feedback! Bananablue42903 (talk) 21:37, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Removed alignment. To upload click on a red link with the correct name. Click on "Choose File" and select the image from your device, it should appear on the ---> side of the screen. At the bottom of the page, click on "Upload File" and your done. :) 21:53, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks! Where you explaining to me how to allign the image? And is it good to add to to wiki page?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 22:08, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

I was explaining how to upload your charart. Alignments aren't allowed, and I just told you that I removed the alignment that was there. 22:12, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart (it doesn't touch the line art in some places), define the tail and leg shading,smooth the ear pink.

Also, since this is your first charart, the header should be "For Evaluation"

Thanks! I'll be sure to do that. Where should I post the edited one, in tweaks?

Nope, you reupload it onto the same image here. Also, the file needs to be renamed to Stoneclaw.kit.png. Lastly, don't forget your signature.

Alright I fixed it. I just just uploaded on a new file. I could not figure out how to upload the charart sorry!

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:18, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

This is still named incorrectly. Define light on the legs on back paw? 23:37, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

How do you rename the image? I swer i named it correctly...

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:39, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

p.s can I be added to the project?

It takes a bit before your join request gets approved. For now on, just upload over File:Stoneclaw.kit.png. 23:41, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Alright I reuploaded the corrected image in File:Stoneclaw.kit.png is it finished?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 23:55, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

The base color looks a tad darker than the other images, and define light on legs more. This is a nice image. :) 00:04, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

I tried lighnting it up a bit, but it always looks darker on the website. I also ligntend up the leggies too. Sould I lighten him up more? The thing I'm concerened about is that it does not look really like fur. But his other sprites were like ths. How do you make it look like fur anyway?

Bananablue42903 (talk) 00:59, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the -> leg and smooth the shading on the <- leg? 01:05, July 7, 2017 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 23:23, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

This should actually be Winterpaw's, I think. They reserved it at 22:34 on the wiki-clock, and you didn't reserve until 23:03. 23:27, July 6, 2017 (UTC)

Yes, I reserved it. :D 23:42, July 6, 2017 (UTC)