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Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie  Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade  Crystie  Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Reuploaded. I like the eye color of the apprentice pic more oof :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  13:19, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

What are the lighter blotches on her? Are those highlights? If so, tone them down (on the opacity bar). Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The pupils appear to be inconsistent in color- one eye has a darker black than the other. Shading is still leaking in some places. Don't worry! I struggle with that as well. Fill those blank areas with shading- I can provide a redline if you want. Smooth out the shading everywhere- just smooth out the edges with the blur or smudge tool, Gaussian Blur makes shading leak away, only use it if you want a really good shading gradient. You have unfilled pixels on > this side of the tail. Sorry for the wall of text! You're doing good so far! 22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Potato! <3 And thank you so much for the redline if you can provide!!! I feel so foolish… <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Here. Red= fill in/add shading. Blue= Remove shading to fit your light source. Green=Waste. Delete that. Yellow= missing/light pixels. Magenta= blur/smudge and tone down the highlights. Hope this helps! (if I mess up on the source sorry if I do). 22:31, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Aww thank you Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  03:40, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm it doesn't appear you did what I said. Did you reupload the right file? The only difference I see is that the highlight blotches are set to a higher opacity.. I meant to lower them, then blur/smudge. If you need any more help, let me know! 03:51, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof... maybe it's the .mpd file, I guess? :P Anyway :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

What is that on her belly? If that's shading depth you need to lighten it and blur/smudge it. Lighten the highlight spots on her legs more and then blur/smudge them. Smooth out the shading and make >> this pupil darker to match <<this pupil. Let me know if you need to elaborate! 13:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! :D School's so busy these days :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:46, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of brown in her eye and smooth the shading on her face.

Highlights are making her turn gray in some areas- if you haven't set them to overlay, you should as I think that should help. 01:35, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail please. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:08, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 0px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:47, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

The tips of her front paws are missing some color and her bottom is too. Her forehead has a dark smudge, I don't know if it's shading or part of her or a mistake.

17:15, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

It's shading :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  06:54, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

There's Gray littered about her, smooth shading on stomach, shoulder and on her forehead. Her set looks like it has a faint, paintbrushy texture. This also looks like it might be a bit of a different color than her set. This looks even sort of red. The texture is most notable on the warrior and can be found on File:Sorrelstripe.warrior.png <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:11, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes appear to be two seperate colors, one is more brownish than the other (>>> this one). 17:37, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh it's the first now! :O Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  12:58, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

The base is inconsistent on the tail, and the texture looks green. Draw 1-2px lines and smudge them in the direction of the fur. 13:01, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the backlegs should be smoothed 12:38, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Hollyflower (E) ~ CBA
mega hollyflower

09:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading, and define it on the white? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:00, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also extend the white on the tail (or at least one part of it) to reach the end of the tail? 20:07, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups

04:16, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

The white on the too doesn't seem to be showing? She's suppose to have it I beleive. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:20, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry but what is the 'too'?

12:49, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe the white on the tail? I can't get what Mink's talking about either.. 15:15, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

It is definitely the tail, the white looks very gray there Malina457 (talk) 15:51, April 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

The tail white on the underside could stand to be smudged out with slightly longer strokes, I think, to match the queen's styling

I was talking about the white on the tail, my phone autocorrected. The star shows it on the top and bottom of the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:07, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

the queen shows it in the same way, the white is very gray due to the shading and i dont think i can do anything about it.

09:54, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe you could try adding some highlights on the white of the tail to lighten it a bit? Or you could make a separate shading layer and put the tail shading on that and set it too a low opacity, so there is shading, but it doesn't make it appear too gray. 03:02, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

reups

13:23, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

I still think the white on the tail should be smudged more, longer strokes instead of short ones just back and forth; the queen shows it feathering out

reups

09:40, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:11, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but looking at her other images, the white should be softer.

I'm sorry but what do you mean?

05:06, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

white looks smoother on her other images. Either smudge/blur it

reups

09:31, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 01:38, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Tornear (E) ~ For Approval
If the OA of the star can send me a psd file (and also tell my how you did the stripes??) then that would be great! If that's not possible, color codes would be good enough. Tinystream (talk) 21:59, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are more bunched together and greater in number <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:49, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

this actually matches really really well lol. id only say make the stripes thicker and softer. i would offer you the file but i really dont think you need it 23:16, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Have got some time still, but are you still working?

Yes, I am. I'll try to reup tomorrow. Tinystream (talk) 06:27, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Light Colored TC Kit - For Approval
cute <span style="">04:52 Wed May 1

could you smooth the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:12, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">19:54 Wed May 1

Can you define the light source? And I don't think the shading by the eye should be there, or it should at least be reduced. -- 22:41, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Since this is from a manga, shouldn't it be grayscale and have the texture removed? 19:54, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

You are right, Bluestar. Cam you smooth out the shading more? 22:31, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">05:48 Fri May 3

Optional, but maybe the lighten the shading a few ticks? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:15, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">16:59 Fri May 3

Where's the source coming from? With how it's on the face and haunch it seems to suggest < way, but if it were so I don't think shading on the backside/ > side of the tail base is needed

reuploaded i redid the shading but i'm envisioning the light source coming in directly from her side, like how we are looking at her <span style="">04:31 Wed May 8

Dawncloud (E) ~ For Approval
wassup  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <00:02, 5/02/2019> ​

Sharpen the stripes and there should be more on the back/sides. <span style="">18:25 Thu May 2 2019

Still working, Star?

Onestar (Alt W) ~ For Approval
this isn't the best but I tried. I matched it to File:Onestar.leader.alt.png <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:45, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit more ^^ 21:07, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, Mink?

I'm gonna withdraw for now as I don't have time right so i might finish this at another time if nobody else does it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:11, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt. Ki 3) - CBA
Not sure if this is right, but wanted to attempt this alt thing. 11:12, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

can you smoothen the texture and define the shading depth? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:26, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  00:51, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also expand the shading the shading okn the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:20, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 01:30, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:39, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Small tabby kit (Ki)- For Approval
Comments? 21:33, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste at the tip of the ear closest to us. And if you can, smooth out the tabby stripes.

21:43, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the forelegs. If you're going for a pointed tabby look, I'd add more stripes to the face and lessen them a bit on the hip 21:53, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded baby kitty  22:11, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, I cant see it at all <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:50, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:15, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a change? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:52, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the change, the shading is much more defined. could you smooth it out on the head and the shoulder area? and perhaps expand it more on the tail? i love the stripes!

Could you darken the shading more? The tint itself is a bit too light (That's most likely the issue) perhaps darken the tint to a much darker purple. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:57, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:56, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and ears? 13:43, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:02, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I like this and it's nice to see you improve :) 01:41, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but could you add/define the facial shading and fix the leaking on the leg? and smooth out the shading everywhere

There's also waste in front of the muzzle. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  10:57, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Bird (E) ~ For Approval
23:03, 5/4/19

Wow! This is amazing! Can you desaturate the earpink? It's really bright and neon. 23:24, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you! 23:48, 5/4/19

This is really good. Could you make the booty stripes lessen, her other images (File:Bird.loner.png) don't seem to have much there. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:55, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you define shading depth on the head just a tad?

reuploaded 14:37, 5/5/19

I'm gonna bump ya up to an apprentice, since you clearly know what you're doing. ^^ You can use "for approval" from now on. 00:19, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Terribly sorry for breaking the CBA, but is there any way you could possibly dull the highlights or reduce the "shiny" bits? It's throwing off the coloring and making it look a tad lighter than her rogue and original CG style, both of whom bear the master pattern due to their creator having designed it.

reuploaded hopefully the change is noticeable enough, let me know if i should fix it again. 21:36, 5/7/19

I'm not seeing any changes in the file history. It's probably a glitch with Wikia, but could you reupload again and see what it does?

reuploaded changes are here if they still aren't showing up. 18:50, 5/8/19

Feathertail (alt kit) ~ CBA
i think i was too ambitious lol. colour-picked from and tried to match the toeh, then the app/star when i could quite see the pattern well. idk how i feel about it

Define the shading in the middle section of her? Like where the front leg and chest is, kinda looks a tad flat over there. 14:58, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

reups changed the whole shading, i was confused about the source lol

Maybe add some shading to the stomach area that's poking through? 01:48, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups i literally thought that was the paw haha oops

CBA? 01:42, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

OS-3 elder 1 - For Evaluation
my first PCA image, I'm still learning Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:29, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

You need to have the heading be OS-3 elder 1- For Evaluation, since you are a kit in the project at the moment. Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink showing. 16:36, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for double commenting, but can you remove the waste around the elder? What I do is I use the lasso tool on the program I use and circle everywhere where there's darkness and hit delete. You can also use the magic wand tool, go to your transparent layer, select outside of the lineart, and go back to your base/shading layers and hit delete. 16:53, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded!Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:59, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink could use a lot of blurring/smudging at the edges. Define the shading on the face and ears, and define the shading depth. To do that, add a thinner, darker layer of shading. Can you give some variation to the stripes so they're not just facing the same direction and have the same width? Lastly, the stripes on the neck and back border on being a triangle tabby- a pattern that was ruled out for being unrealistic. I'd reccomend to make them more like the other stripes. If you need me to elaborate, let me know! 17:35, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The back/neck stripes look fine, but the one stripe on the shoulder connecting to the head does look out of place. I can redline if need be. Also the shading needs to be defined everywhere. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <22:57, 5/05/2019> ​

this needs to be short-furred since they're windclan

Moonyy might be wrong and right. Thistleheart was WindClan and she had long fur. Can you darken the shading a tad?

windclan cats have to be short-furred unless specified otherwise, Thistlehesrt was specified to be long haired 16:25, May 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Mottled ShC tom - CBA
Wasn't sure what color to make him, so I just made him brown. It was on the charart list, so I assume it's good to make an image for.

Perhaps add a little shading at the base of the chest? I also think the little triangle that represents the back paw would be a bit more heavily shaded given how it's tucked under

Re-uploaded. I'd honestly just forgotten the base of the chest LMAO.

Coolios. CBA?

Short Furred White TC Warrior~ For Approval
Will be tweaking the eyes Malina457 (talk) 19:16, May 6, 2019 (UTC)malina

Define the nosepink and smooth out the shading. The heading lacks "For Approval" as well. 00:02, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

I'd suggest lessening the shoulder shading and lightening the shading overall <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:14, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

Add or define shading depth

reups Malina457 (talk) 01:46, May 7, 2019 (UTC)mailna

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail. 01:47, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 02:25, May 7, 2019 (UTC)malina

Smoooth the upper shoulder and back shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:58, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

Will do, side note I am aiming for rougher shading Malina457 (talk) 14:08, May 7, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups Malina457 (talk) 20:52, May 7, 2019 (UTC)malina

can you smooth the transition on the chest shading a bit? the transition on the haunch shading is good, maybe make it match that a little more? <span style="">17:58 Wed May 8

reups Malina457 (talk) 21:31, May 8, 2019 (UTC)malina

Applepaw (K) - For Approval
01:09, May 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The ear pink appears lighter on the apprentice. 01:49, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded  02:05, May 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading everywhere. 02:22, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

do you want the file? id also say shes supposed to be less striped and more of a mottled tabby. her entire body should be mottled and her legs+tail are the only places that should be striped 02:45, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

if you don’t mind ^^ 02:54, May 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded now more based on burntclaw's image 22:36, May 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Cat with darker pelt and foul-smelling flesh (DF) - For Approval
Since no description was given other than a dark pelt, I made them a dark blue-gray. Not 100% sure on the shading (for reference, supposed to be coming from our right). Juniperbriar (talk) 16:31, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

Is this supposed to be dark blue or is it a mistake?

Read what Juniper said above- dark pelt could mean any color including dark blue-gray. 01:10, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add some shading to the shoulder? 01:36, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Didn't see that..

Reuploaded. Juniperbriar (talk) 19:42, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Wiry brown tom (DF) - For Approval
I like how this came out. Based off a seal sepia cat. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:25, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

i like this design! can you define the earpink? 22:44, 5/7/19

Define the shading? 22:55, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is very present, if a bit  leaking on the stomach, needs no defining Malina457 (talk) 23:22, May 7, 2019 (UTC)malina

Will define the earpink, but the light part on the stomach is actually supposed to be bounce light. I'll change the color of it. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:35, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

You don't need to change the bounce light; Mistystar's apprentice has it as well, so I think you'll be good.

Running Horse (E) - For Approval
not really sure about this one LOL 00:44, May 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

His tail needs to be bent upwards, and the shading could be defined. 01:13, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

It doesn't say in his description that he has a bent tail? And is there light/white in the eye? I may just be blind and not seeing it lol. 01:35, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

XD brain fail. Yeah, forgot the ancien wasn't in use, pls ignore me 02:50, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Might you, in addition to defining the shading, darken it a bit as well?

could you make the texture flow so that it follows the curve of the body and not just straight diagonally?

Pad - Declined
Uh I did Pad? From the Graystripe novella's One of the little kits. Uh link to his page is here: [//warriors.fandom.com/wiki/Pad https://warriors.fandom.com/wiki/Pad]

Here is the Char art I hope I did this right? If i didnt please tell me! Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:45, May 8, 2019 (UTC)Milliemoo92Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 00:45, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Have you read discussions? He counts as a kit and will be redone in June. 01:12, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Potato is right; his and the other original kit images will be redone next month. You are more than welcome to reserve Pad then! Gonna have to decline this in the meantime. 01:33, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Ok but i have a question... Does it look ok? I could try and do similar ones for other characters? But I would like to reserve Pad :) Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:57, May 8, 2019 (UTC)Milliemoo92Milliemoo92 Sso (talk) 01:57, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

to be fair pad IS listed under the characters needing art page. 22:38, May 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Wiry Brown tom (Dark forest)
Hi so I tried another one and im still not sure im doing this right but could I at least have an opinion on if this is the right blank and what I need to work on...

Thanks!

Milliemoo92 Sso (talk)Milliemoo92Milliemoo92 Sso (talk)

Jose already posted this.. 02:48, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Seedpelt (MV) (E) - For Approval
06:11, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

So there's a bit of a mix-up with this. We had to split the Seedpelt pages again, I think, and this Seedpelt is only a warrior, not an elder...since we don't know for sure that the Seedpelt in PC is also the Seedpelt from MV.

Pebble Heart (Alt. K) - For Approval
he's gonna be hot when he grows up, even if he is a mistake 06:11, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think this already exists but needs to be redone with the kit blanks come June.