Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Jayfeather (A) ~ Redone
OA of last version was Ducksplash; redone to thin stripes/match his other images. 23:50, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the texture on both images? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:16, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit too on both images.

Waitwait, why was his MCA approved while the comments were obviously directed at both images? Just confused. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:08, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes much more and lighten up his base. Also, he has some hidden mottles under his tabby layer. 4:22 Sat Jan 17

I restored the image where it belongs since there is stuff that needs to be done, and I already said to smudge the stripes...

I should be able to reupload sometime in the next few days, if time allows. 19:47, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.-- 22:28, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up his base, he looks quite dark compared to his other images. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:42, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the stripes some more? I can barely see that it's smudged. Also, try using the hard-edge brush - that's what I used on the MC and the kit. 14:54 Sun Jan 18

Should be reuploading sometime tomorrow. Sorry about that. 05:51, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, finally.-- 21:25, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:38, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.-- 01:18, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten him up a tad, he looks really dark. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:48, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

His base is already a very light white-ish silver.-- 03:03, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Still, he looks rather dark compared to his other images, maybe lighten the stripes some? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:08, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.-- 18:09, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MCA) ~ Redone
Last OA was Ducksplash, redone to thin stripes/match other images. 23:51, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Archived. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:43, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

I'm readding this to the tweak page because there's stuff that needs to be done. Please see the apprentice's section.

Re-uploaded. 22:29, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

See the apprentice. <span style="">14:55 Sun Jan 18

Re-uploaded.-- 21:25, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, again.-- 01:18, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.-- 18:05, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Graywing (WC) (Ro) ~ Redone
Kind of hard edged? 03:11, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading style the same as the other images to match them a bit more? That's mostly why I nominated for it. Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:20, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is really dark. (Not sure if I'm allowed to comment on these or if i just can't tweak/redo please let me know if i did something wrong thanks) <span style="">04:41 Fri Jan 16 04:41, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shading style is not required to match. Although I think the shading on this is a bit too thick- can you thin it out?

blur it a bunch too and maybe darken his pelt a bit? this doesnt even look dark grey, more neutral. 14:13, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 03:43, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add more light to the tail tip. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:08, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton on his haunch. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 11:15, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:04, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons more and add depth to it. <span style="">20:57 Sun Jan 18

Define the light source? 10:23, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-upped. I really can't blur it more.'''  23:26, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

He looks very dark. Lighten up the shading some? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:22, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (w) ~ tweaked
OA be iceheart, tweaked for brown, which i used skt's method in doing so. comments? 19:13, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

He looks rather flat. Try adding some highlights? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:20, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

tbh I say just define the shading and that should do it. <span style="">2:05 Mon Jan 19

re-up this cat just came to me...and he said 'mess me up' 03:19, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white, please. He looks so gray.

re-up 19:53, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the white a bit, and define where the shadows are falling, especially on his neck. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:51, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i think i had to rework his lightsource a teeny bit whoop 22:33, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Now his entire neck seems to be in shadow. Maybe put part of it in the light? Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:01, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

with how the light source is rn i think it's fine 00:09, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Is the shading on the front paw that is furthest away from us unsmudged/unblurred? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:37, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

define the earpink, cant see it. 00:18, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (L) - Tweaked
OA is Atelda and I made her darker and defined the flat shading.

you think you could dull her earpink a little? it looks a bit bright, especially on a black cat anyway. 21:12, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love the desaturate tool so much.

The ear pink doesn't match her other images too much. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:15, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think it matches the ancient and StarClan images just fine. The kit's is slightly darker, and I actually can't see it as it is.

Brackenfur (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is Rainfacestar. Tweaked to remove green. I used .Trollsky's technique for this for the others tweaking his kit and Warrior, I used the colour #A95800. --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:01, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks rather green. <span style="">23:37 Tue Jan 20

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:47, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the flank, chest, and face, please. Nice job. 00:00, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:07, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the stripes more. I can't see them at all on the main part of his body.

Reupload Tried to match the Brackenfur warrior below. -- 21:39, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you need to know what color I used because it looks pretty similar to me, but if you want to know, I used #d0b385 on one layer on multiply, opacity 35.3, and I also used #bc8b60 on another layer set to multiply at opacity 27.8 <span style="">0:29 Thu Jan 22

Thanks for that! ^^ I asked for help before I changed it to what it is now, but thanks anyway! -- 01:04, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA is me, tweaked to be darker. 23:34, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

lighten it up some, I literally can't see anything but her eyes. 23:37, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Tweaked 23:42, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the ear pink- I can't see it at all.

Swallowtail (WC) (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mistypebble, tweaked to be darker. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:20, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail- I can't tell there's any at all.

Re-upped I hate these tails O.O <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:07, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Stonefur (Alt kit) ~ Tweaked
OA was atelda, tweaked for light on the legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:41, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Her ear pink doesn't seem light pinkish. Its more Hot pink like. Other than that, I think her shading is fine. <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 21:50 January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (Ancient) ~ Tweaked
wow, I need to get back into tweaking. OA be me, and it was tweaked for a darker pelt, which I colour-picked from the leader. 15:52, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten her up a liiiiittttttle bit I literally can't see anything but black, ear pink and her tongue. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:40, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

She's plenty light, but the shading needs softened. And there probably wouldn't be any light on her chest. <span style="">16:09 Thu Jan 22 2015

Can you dim down the lighting on <-- this Cheek? Its a little bright for a black cat. <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 21:52 January 22, 2015