Talk:Tawnypelt

Current:

 * Moonrise, Eclipse, Sunrise and the OTS sections could be expanded.
 * Needs some quotes.
 * Needs Citation in description for slender.
 * Find citation for Tawnypelt wanting Tigerheart to have strength like Tigerstar. I removed it until we can find it.

Older:

 * Cite Mentors G B 57 06:03, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Improve the writing style of The Darkest Hour History section. G B 57 06:03, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Improve the writing style of the Moonrise History section. G B 57 06:03, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * The Sight - If she doesn't appear in the book properly, get rid of it. G B 57 06:03, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Expand The Dark River section. If mention of her kits is how she 'appears', get rid of the section. It needs to say she had the kits, otherwise, people will look at it and think "Did she just magically have kits?" G B 57  06:03, 24 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Expand the Outcast section into a proper paragraph. G <font color="Green" style="background:Black">B <font color="#9933FF" style="background:Black">57 06:03, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Bronze
On November 5, 2007 Kitsufox promoted this article to bronze.

Silver
On July 31, 2008 Kitsufox put this article up for silver vote. With two yay votes and zero nay votes, Tawnypelt was promoted to silver.

Pelt Colour Question
In Cats Of The Clans, Tawnypelt is the same colour as Redtail(i dont know what that colour is called) and i wondered if it was the same Tawnypelt, or one that you havent got a page for?--<font color="lime" style="background:Black">☻Sunstar27☻ Follow your Destiny! 14:26, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, that's the same Tawnypelt. There are many mistakes in Cats of the Clans, we don't even bother to list them anywhere. 15:31, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't she called a pale ginger in the original series, too? 17:20, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. That's on her trivia. 17:22, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

But what about the cat on long shadows? whos that?<font color="lime" style="background:Black">☻Sunstar27☻ Follow your Destiny! 17:55, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

That's Sol, a completely different cat... 18:20, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

aaahh. i see. :) <font color="lime" style="background:Black">☻Sunstar27☻ Follow your Destiny! 08:48, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Quotes
Ok, so i could get some quotes, from the OS, but then i would post them here for you guys to tell me if they are worthy or not. also, where do they go? between trivia and family? thanks, <font color="lime" style="background:Black">☻Sunstar27☻ Follow your Destiny! 17:55, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Question about her pelt ...
Where does it say she is a dark tortoiseshell? In her description it says Long Shadows allegiances but in there it only calls her a 'tortoiseshell' Help anyone? Dappleclaw Can you read my poker face ... 21:56, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

What. . .? She's always described as dark tortoiseshell. At least, from what I know, her appearance is dark tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes. 22:00, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, then I guess I'm going crazy or something ... Dappleclaw Can you read my poker face ... 22:03, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

well she was a 'pale ginger' kit the a dark tortie sooo yeah71.164.203.114 21:24, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Eeek!
I was editing the Moonrise section, but it was going all crazy, and I accidentally hit "Save" instead of "Preview". Could somebody please help me fix it? Aspenheart 15:24, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind, I got it. Aspenheart 15:27, September 19, 2010 (UTC)