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Sandstorm (A) - For Approval


I'm back with a new charart! And (luckily) this one is about 1,000 times better then Icicle. This is 37 but 2 of the things were discussions so technically this is 35. I just want to say thatnks to Ashshadow for some great advice and help and to al of the turtorial authors, you were very helpful. Anyways, quistions? Comments? -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:11, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Saint Ice 23:23, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? i learned an important lesson for the next time I do a tabby:shade FIRST! Then you can do the tabby markings. -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:40, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I put it near the top again. The shading needs some more burring and the stripes need to be thickened a bit more--  Night shine   ♣  01:41, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

You're actually supposed to do the stripes before shading so that everything is shaded equally. In addition to what Nightshine said make the stripes a little longer. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:44, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Gah1 I accidentaly deleted the file! It migt take me a while but I'll get her back up soon.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:47, February 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm going to have to disagree Ash - I always do my shading first and use the burn tool to add stripes resulting in the same evenly shaded effect without the overblurred stripes because of trying to blur the shading. Anyway, this is good Artimas, just make everything more polished. Make sure there aren't gaps in the shading, so it looks consistent, and make your stripes a little thicker. ✐S  aN  dY  22:42, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I forgot about burning the stripes on. My comment only applies if you paint the stripes on. Did you check your recyling bin for the sandpaw file? Haikage Ash's Talk 02:25, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas, if you just save the image from this site (Right click the image above and select 'save as') then you can get it that way. For the image, I can't say much that the others haven't already said, so, yeah. ♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:34, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

You guys are life savers! I'll be back in just a minute. Hopefully.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'm back. i tried to do everything you guys said. How does it look?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:38, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are a bit too dark and I dont see that many stripes on her tail. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more.--Shaf Girl  03:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is this good?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:19, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone comment? Is this good or not? I'm sorry, I'm just really impatient and I can't wait until my first charart gets approved! :D -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:35, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes darker on the leg farthest from us. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:06, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Is this dark enough?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:00, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit SQUARE, was that on purpose? No hurt intended, but I think you should have the stripes move around the body. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:03, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't seem to get them circly. Is it ok like this? Sorry, keep in mind, this nis only my first charart.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:35, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, wow! Is this your first attempt at a tabby? If so, it's pretty good! (You should see my first attempt at a tabby. LOL. xD) But the stripes don't exactly resemble the ones on Sandstorm's Warrior/Queen image. Try making them a bit more curved, and make them like tree branches so they split off in differant places. See This page if you really can't get the hang of it. ^_^ Shistar Mai Talk Page 18:39, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I know that she's facing the other way in her warrior pic, but I think she has too many stripes. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:47, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I will work on that when I get home, I'm at school right now. ^^ -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:21, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Redone, is this better? I did less stripes and tried to make them curve more. :) -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:44, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit thicker. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:12, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:45, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

So...comments?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 00:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone please tell me: is this goo? Sorry, I feel like this has been up forever and no ones approving or ging help eather. I really need something to do. :P -- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 23:45, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

The colour isn't the same as her warrior image--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:51, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Are you talking about the stripes or the pelt? Because I got the pelt color from her warrior image and I burned the stripes on. -- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 01:01, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe color isn't right--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     01:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow and Sandy told me to burn the stripes on, should I make it darker? Sorry for all ther stuipid questions ^^ -- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 17:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

I was talking about shading not burning the stripes on. I think ther should be a bit lighter. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:26, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks, I'll work on that now.-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:58, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, done. Are these stripes better? I can't wait til this gets approved!-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:12, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still doesn't look right. Add shading around the arms and chest, not just the back--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     21:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think I had some shading on the lgs and chest but I added more. Is this good?-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 15:19, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:03, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I can kind of see the shading on the back, and you should blur it. Brightmoon  The Sign of the Moon!  19:18, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

I wasn't sure what shading you meant Ash so I blurred it all. Blurry enough? ^^ -- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:28, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry... But no. On the back, there is a distinct line where the shading starts. Sorry Artimas. Brightmoon  The Sign of the Moon!  23:21, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading and stripes need blending a little more. ✐S aN  dY  16:48, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred some more, I think it's good but for some reason, when its on pile it looks goodb but when I post it its all weird. Go figure. Anyways, is this better?-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:25, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

You may want to make the stripes a bit darker. I don't know if I'm the only one who thinks so or not. -- Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 00:40, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, but I had them dakr and someone said they neded to be lighter. But I don't know, should they be daker? -- Bramblepath Brightshadow is mine! 19:44, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripe color is ok. Her description is barely visible tabby stripes. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:14, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah. That's right. The color's good. -- Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 22:37, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's ok Moonflight, you thought it needed to be fixed so you saids smething. That's what you're supposed to do. ^^ Anything else I need to fix?-- Bramblepath Brightshadow is mine! 15:46, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading around the haunch some more and add some to the top of her head. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:31, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred a little more, the earpink should be a little bigger and she needs some shading on the leg farthest from us. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:35, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this took so long. I did every thing but I'm kinda fuzzy on what you meant by thickening the shading. Can you elaborate? Thanks. ^^ -- Bramblepath Brightshadow is mine! 02:12, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add more to the curve of the haunch. thats all I meant. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:17, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I this any better?-- Moonbeam SkyClan will rise! 22:00, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes a little lighter. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:15, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Lighter stripes.-- Brightshadow You belong with me! 14:44, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are all the same colour, even in the shading... How did that happen? Butterfly } { Song!  19:22, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please do so or it will have to be declined. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:39, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowclaw, I worked on this yesterday. And Crystal, I think they're supposed to be the same color.-- Brightshadow You belong with me! 14:52, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge(KP) - For Approval.
Birchy here! Since Jmiles is having computer problems, I'm taking over this charart. I'll do this the best I can! Birchy I am a warrior at heart...

Well... here you go. I know that Spottedsky reserved this earlier, but there was no CharArt (that I know of) for smudge yet, and it was reserved awhile ago, so, I hope this works out. So... comments?Jmiles 06:46, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Darken the shading, and change the file name. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 11:19, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh wait. You already have one image up for approval. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 12:04, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but the spots need to be bigger, and Maple's right, you have one up for approval already. I don't know much yet, but I think the senior warriors will decline it, or

something. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:14, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I thought someone already reserved this? O.o -  B-Day -Kitty!   :D  21:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Jmiles, this will have to be declined until your first image is approved. I think one of the seniors warriors will have to decline this. When your first image is approved, then you can put this up. Rain whisker  22:23, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, it said he was black and white, not black with white spots... Quoth the Raven, Nevermore  00:49, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It never said that he was black with white. It showed that in Cats of the Clans, but that book can't really be trusted as a lot of the characters in that book were done completely wrong. He's white with black patches, and it says that he has amber eyes, not blue. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:48, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

OK. White with black patches, amber eyes, darken the shading. Consider it done. As for having one image already up for approval, if you haven't noticed already, IT CANNOT BE APPROVED!!!! It was already reserved by Insane. Go up and see it if you want. Somebody please help explain all this reservation stuff and approval stuff on my Talk Page, because I'm really, really confused! Jmiles 19:06, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's fine. I'll decline the Mudclaw now. ✐S aN  dY  19:07, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! After it's declined, can I try Smudge again? And I wouls still like some explanation on my talk page, if it isn't too much trouble. Jmiles 19:15, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

You can continue working on him now, and I'll come and write what will undoubtedly turn into a rather long explanation (through no fault of my own) on your talk page. ✐S aN  dY  20:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry. I sorta died on the blur tool. I had a bad day. (my internet crashed twice and I have the flu)Jmiles 05:40, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, I'm sorry to hear that! Well, he looks better. But I would define the patches more, they look to blurred now. And also, add ear pink to the left ear Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look more orange than amber. Haikage Ash's Talk 15:41, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

OK, less orange eyes, more patch definition, and ear pink in the left ear. Got it. Jmiles 16:21, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changed the eye color, redefined the black patches. I was a little confused about where exactly to put the ear pink because of the angle that he was at. If it's the exact same image, tell me. My computer did not want to put this one on, and it kept uploading the old one. Jmiles 16:46, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I understand. My computer doesnt want me to upload the image period. As for your image, blur the patches a tiny bit more and his eyes still seem orange. Amber is a bit more golden. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:51, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay. I'll do that. Jmiles 16:59, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Still not quite amber... I think. I pushed the rate on the blur tool to 80%, and blurred the patches more. Once again, tell me if there's anything wrong with the image (I mean upload wise) Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 21:00, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

The eyecolor is fine now. Sorry when I took it out of thumbnail size it showed up under your first message. Imagewise, try to make the white a little less gray and darken the shading. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:48, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. OK, I got the shading darkened and redefined the white in his fur. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 02:08, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Instead of having his fur w/ black spots, make it more like less circular patches and clusters, and the eyes are a little too brown. Try using a reddish orange instead of a brownish one. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:43, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

When you say to make "more less circular patches and clusters", do you mean like a tortoiseshell, just with only 2 colors? I think I know what you mean, maybe. I can do the eye color thing though. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 01:49, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think that's what she's talking about, so it's sort of like the style used here. Also, there's blurred lineart in various places. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   21:04, March 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Whoops, forgot to say that I think the patches are fine as they are now, though. :) -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   21:10, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay, I'll fix the lineart. But do I change the patches or not, because I really don't want to. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 05:23, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think that the patches are fine. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   01:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

There is too much gray. Dark hallows 18:26, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I'll leve the patches as they are. Do you just want me to use dodge to get rid of some gray? Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 20:02, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Alrighty, I used the dodge tool to lighten it, amber-ed the eyes up, and fixed the lineart. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 22:22, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

make the patches bigger, because they look a bit like spots. Though this is really good! Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:22, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the patches bigger, and also, you might see that you went outside the outline... Brightmoon   The Sign of the Moon!  19:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Can do, I'll reupload soon. Just got a lot on my plate right now. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 03:13, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look red. Choose a more orangey colour. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  19:50, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's been a week, please work on this or it will be declined Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:57, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

I will, sorry! I really am! I'm just having computer issues. Jmiles Clicky, Clicky!!! 05:41, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Jmiles, do you want me to continue editing this while you're having computer problems? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  18:02, April 2, 2010 (UTC)


 * Well if you do the lineart is smudged near the whiskers. The shading seems odd as its only light on his face and his whole entire back. Plus the shading near the patches are smudged as well.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  22:17, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, please Birchy! My computer is officially breaking down. In about a day, It'll stop working. I'm very sorry. Jmiles Clicky, Clicky!!! 01:04, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then. I'll do this for you Jmiles. When your computer's ready to fight again, you can resume this. Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  11:26, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did the pictue again, but I'm keeping the other one. I wasn't sure. Anyways... Comments? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  15:38, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I love how you did that patches. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 23:35, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

The second one is very good! Just darken the patches, they look a little gray right now Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:13, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Feathertail (Ki) - for approval


Im not proud of this image. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  21:08, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Forgot to mention that there are 4 discussions and 1 being declined. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  21:12, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

I have this image reserved! Someone keeps taking it off but I swear, I do. And no one before me had it, can I please do it? Feathertail is my faveorite charecter. Please?-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well if you had this image reserved before the user erased it, then I guess. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  22:03, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas, your two weeks were up, I think. So I think Moss has permission to do this image -- Ice Spring is here! 22:12, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well the two week limit was up but she has a character up for approval so it can't really count. I think the reason your reservations were removed was because of the lack of date. This is something you two will have to settle on your own. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:16, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Your projects have been removed because you don't date them Artimas. We didn't add the date column just for fun... it kinda needs to be filled. Sandwich has the full right to do this image as it was reserved incorrectly. This may seem unfair but... perhaps focus on getting Sandstorm (A) approved first Artimas.If you want to sort something out between you then it needs to go to the talk pages. ✐S aN  dY  22:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


 * Some comments on the image itself: the nose needs colour and the stripes need to be darkened. Also add some stripes on her belly and chest as there is a big gap. ✐S  aN  dY  17:00, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'll keep the image. Real sorry, Artimas. I'll promise i'll make this image really pretty. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  19:49, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks but i just want to say (not being obsessive here) but the reason there wasn't a date was because I had this reserved before the table was set up. By the time it was set up I had forgotten the date. So, whatever you peeps think. I'll be disappointed if I can't do it but I know you'll do a great job Sandwhich.

Anyway, she needs to be more silver, now she's kinda gray.-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:22, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

To get her the color she is on her warrior image, you can save her warrior image and use the dropper to get the color on this picture. I don't know if you knew that already.-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:40, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to make it more Silver, and add tabby markings moer, and I made the shading more of my style of kits. But I think I made it worse? ♣Gaelic Irish♣  22:48, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think the silver is good, she was described as a silver kit several times, but maybe make the tabby marks bigger and have less of them?-- Artimas Hunter Warning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:53, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ummmmm.....it's been like 3 days and nothings happened. Are you still here Sandwich?-- Bramblepath Brightshadow is mine! 16:11, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas calm down. A user has a week before they have to work on an image. Imagewise, the silver still seems a bit dark and the stripes a bit light compared to her other images. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:15, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not trying to be mean Ash. I just wanted to know if Sandwich was still working on her.-- Bramblepath Brightshadow is mine! 16:17, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I know you're not trying to be mean. I'm just saying that they still have four days before comments like yours should be made. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:24, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm working on it. I just have to redo the shading then I can put it up. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  18:27, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- okay, I think I failed at this attempt. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  22:04, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. The only thing is that the stripes shouldn't go stright across the tail. I can't tell in her warrior image but they dont in her apprentice image. Also blur the body stripes a tiny bit. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:09, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Like Ash said, make the stripes more like the Y's M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:27, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

For sure, I will get to this on Monday (I'm at my dad's, he doesnt have GIMP). ♣Gaelic Irish♣  23:54, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  23:53, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is better now, but I can't see the ear pink on our right and Featherkit's left ear..-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:27, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Her left ear is in the shade. ♣Gaelic Irish♣  19:32, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind then, I see it now. I think this is ready for approval. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 22:05, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Raggedstar (D) - For Approval
This is Raggedpelt, one of my favorite warriors, EVER! I think I did... ok. Bra mble  berry!  16:23, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Does this mean that you're withdrawing Boulder? Imagewise the hind foot closest to us needs to be colored. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:28, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

He needs a ripped ear--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     19:32, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Considering you've expressed the want to withdraw Boulder and do this image, I'll let this stay up and take over your Boulder image myself, because there are very minor changes needed and it can be approved. Although, you shouldn't waste your work. You're throwing away a perfectly good image just because you want to do another. -- Bramble 22:22, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble's right about that, silver. Anyway, for the image, I know that his leader image has green eyes, but in "Bluestar's Prophecy", it said he had yellow. Should this be changed now, or do we have to wait for the next tweak week? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:32, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Eye colour. If you can cite it then tell me and I'll quickly change the leader image. It won't take two minutes. ✐S aN  dY  08:51, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow! Sandy, you're awake? Its 4:55am here, I'm wide awake! Bra mble  berry!  08:56, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     18:27, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back ear, and darken the shading on the chest and belly just a little bit. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   13:36, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, about the citation. On page 163 of "Bluestar's Prophecy", it says here - A dark tabby tom, his yellow eyes blazing, was staring at Stormtail from among the ShadowClan warriors. It doesn't say that it was Raggedpelt, and over on page 166, it says - ''"Raggedpelt will take his place," Cedarstar went on. A dark brown warrior stalked from the crowd of ShadowClan cats into a pool of moonlight below the rock.'' Now, I know that it's possible those were two totally different cats, but I really think they were both Raggedpelt. I also looked in the allegiances, Raggedpelt is the only dark brown tabby in ShadowClan. (Featherstorm is brown tabby, but she's a queen. And Lizardfang is light brown tabby, but he's an elder) So, what do you guys think? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:53, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The chances that the cat on page 163 is not Raggedpelt are one in a million. Unless someone can find something saying he has green eyes, I think you should change his eyes you yellow. Also, the stripe on the top of his haunch and his belly look like they are one large triangle and it looks odd. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:36, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The tufts of fur on his hauch don't look like tufts of fur. Fix that. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  22:25, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ☮Silverthistle  Berrystumpytail, Ha!☮  15:02, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:34, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, I ah- never would have found it if it weren't for you, Nightshine! Also, aren't we allowed to have anouther image up for approval? Thats what I heard. ☮Silverthistle Berrystumpytail, Ha!☮  12:31, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Where'd you hear that? Only one image per person. Oh and, I found the citation ;) Blur the shading on his haunch more Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 16:46, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred haunch shading more. K! Got it, <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 13:47, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

His belly is missing the raggedy-fur look Butterfly }  { Song!  19:28, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) - For Approval
i dont think any of my charcats are very good anymore...how's this? Pebble2Pineow 22:13, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is good or bad news but its his other leg that is deformed. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:16, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded i hope its this one Pebble2Pineow 22:47, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Layer a regular warrior blank over this; his leg wouldn't have been deformed while he was performing warrior duties, or at least it wasn't troubling him. Also, please put a link in your signature instead of just the text. I fixed the one above for you. -- Bramble 23:10, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded how's this?Pebble2Pineow 02:07, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart for the feet looks a little funny. Can you fix it? I can if you don't want to--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     05:34, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks a little... scratchy, as if the sharpen tool has been used in places. Run the blur tool over it a few times and also blend the ear pink. ✐S aN  dY  08:55, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

how's this?Pebble2Pineow 16:05, March 28, 2010 (UTC)


 * I believe while you shaded you went outside the lines as you can see white-gray streaks coming out near his tail. Erase these and the easiest way is to add a white background again to the image. Once done just make it transparent again.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:43, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be blurred and the line art around his hind leg still looks odd. It's too square. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:41, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

im not rlly sure how im goin to get the leg good nightshine? can you help me?Pebble2Pineow 16:01, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it for you :)--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     03:46, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

thanks night :D reuploaded Pebble2Pineow 02:02, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like on his lower haunch he has a smile face like :) that but facing the normal way. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

i cant really tell where that is can you circle it Minnow?Pebble2Pineow 21:10, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I circled the smile in red. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 00:13, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded this is gonna be the last image ill do for the PCA pebble2pineow 02:17, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks really good! Lighten his back right foot a tiny bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:45, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (A) - For Approval

 * I know how I keep disappearing so much and wow I must admit, you guys have done a great job of getting so many images up I almost couldn't find any to do. However I did :D This guy was shown to us as an apprentice during Bluestar's Prophecy...well he was mentioned, remember the apprentice who got into a fight at a Gathering ;) ? So here's an image that I've done. I looked at his leader one for reference on his colors so I think I have him downpacked. Comments anyonez?-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  00:02, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading. This is good. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:08, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back, Shimmer, good to see you. :) I think the three most obvious highlights, on the face, shoulder and haunch shouldn't be there; they look awkward. I think the image would look just fine without them. Ash is also right about adding some more shading, and the ear pink: make that a little bit more visible. -- Bramble 00:16, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hiya, Shimmer, welcome back:D *hugglez* Bramble and Ash have covered most of it, but the ear pink needs to be a bit bigger as well. This looks awesome, otherwise:) -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  00:22, March 28, 2010 (UTC)


 * UPDATED I couldn't get rid of the highlights...afraid I lost that touch of taking them away and keep on editing. But I blended them in more and made the ear pink more visible.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:09, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely, Shimmer. Welcome back by the way. :) Just blur the highlights more, and the stripes need more blending. Ice Spring is here! 01:33, March 28, 2010 (UTC)


 * Done and done :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:48, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

His tail doesn't really look right. On his deputy, rogue, and leader image, his tail bends up -

But on this image, it just looks like there's a tiny bend in the middle of the tail. Bring the tip of the tail up higher Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:26, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yo Shimmerpool! Welcome back. :) There's a little bit of blurred lineart on the muzzle, and darken the shading on the tail a little bit. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   16:38, March 28, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated Is the tail better?-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  17:55, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Try doing the charart again with this blank I made with the tail up. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...07:46, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


 * Done....-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:38, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ok...changes aren't showing >.< but when you look under the add image you see the new version until you click it.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:41, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The changes are showing now. The highlights still look kind of messy, so either darken them just a tad bit, or blur them some more. Also, it looks like some of the lineart on one of the hind paws got erased, and there's some jagged lineart on the tail. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   02:00, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * I can't tell Ice as they still aren't showing up for me :( I noticed that when I got that blank about the legs and tried readding some of it. Once it shows up for me I'll see it more...Edit Lets try again...under new upload I saw the very old version..so I'm not sure what you guys are seing but I fixed what you said on the version I have on my computer.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:06, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

No comments in a few days kind of have me worried....-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:59, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Bend the tail up a little bit more. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:39, April 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * Updated-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:14, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes on his back a bit longer Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:29, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Updated-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  00:39, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (W) - For Approval
Hey, this is my first charart (after my miserable Snowtuft -_- sorry insane), so constructments? Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  21:32, March 28, 2010 (UTC) This is good for a first timer! But the pelt color is really dark. Try to make it more like her medicine cat image: Also, blur the ear pink a little more.<font color="#33FF00">Snowstorm! 21:58, March 28, 2010 (UTC)



Reuploaded. I lightened the pelt, and blurred that earpink. Anymore comments? Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  23:19, March 28, 2010 (UTC) The pelt still needs to b lightened a lot more Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:21, March 28, 2010 (UTC) Crud it! I uploaded the wrong cat LOL FAIL Be done in a min ;D Brightmoon   Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  23:53, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Epic fail on my part. Any more comments? Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  23:57, March 28, 2010 (UTC) Blur the shading some more. <font color="cyan" style="background:Black">☯Sgt. Pepper's☯ Lonely Hearts Club Band 00:42, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading. Any more comments? Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  19:22, March 29, 2010 (UTC) The back paw on her med cat image is brown and the flecks need to be blurred more. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:36, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Did paw thing and blurred flecks till they looked pretty much gray. LOL! Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon

20:03, March 29, 2010 (UTC) Darken her eye color a bit? <font color="cyan" style="background:Black">☯Sgt. Pepper's☯ Lonely Hearts Club Band 16:25, March 30, 2010 (UTC) '''Reuploaded. '''Darkened eye thing. Any more comments? Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  19:02, March 30, 2010 (UTC) The earpink needs blurring and flecks need tons of blurring. -- Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 21:06, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred. Till. I. Died. Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  23:20, March 30, 2010 (UTC).

The brown paw is gone now. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:04, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Brown pawed. Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  22:23, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit, mainly on her back legs <font color="cyan" style="background:Black">☯Sgt. Pepper's☯ Lonely Hearts Club Band 23:14, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Shade blurred. Brightmoon  Night Whispers,  and Sign of the Moon!  00:11, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Can you run the burn tool over it to make it darker?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:40, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darking shaded. (Notice how I have weird uploaded phrases.) Flowerflight   April Showers bring Mayflowers, and Mayflowers bring Pilgrims!  12:42, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Not just the shading but the whole image. Blur the shading and darken whole thing again. There is a white pixel on the chest. Can you fill that in?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     00:25, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened entire cat. Flowerflight  April Showers bring Mayflowers, and Mayflowers bring Pilgrims!  01:07, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks rather smudgy now. I'm not sure how you can fix that. Haikage Ash's Talk 14:45, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

No idea either. Darn. Well... I might just redo it... I dunno... Suggestions? Flowerflight  April Showers bring Mayflowers, and Mayflowers bring Pilgrims!  14:46, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks cool now... M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:44, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The flecks look very gray, make them brown Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:19, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Browned flecks. Flowerflight  April Showers bring Mayflowers, and Mayflowers bring Pilgrims!  15:53, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Any more comments? It's been four days... <font color="blue" style="background:Black">✆Brightflight✆ The Amazing Bean Machine! 20:21, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thin the shading on the back and add some flecks . Haikage Ash's Talk 20:51, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hey people... I can't work on Thrushpelt right now... I am going on a hiatus. Sorry. <font color="blue" style="background:Black">✆Brightflight✆ The Amazing Bean Machine! 13:45, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W) - For Approval
Okay, Insane said I had permission to use this blank, so I did. I thought of a challenging cat to do, and he came into my mind. :) Construments? Ice Spring is here! 23:37, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

nice job Iceh :D but i think you could just blur/smudge the shadin a bit more and itll be good anyways nice jobPebble2Pineow 23:43, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ice Spring is here! 23:50, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good, but check your placement of the cream patches. His back paws aren't cream, only his front paws. And also, add the little cream splotch on his foreleg. insaneular   Talk  00:59, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Are the changes showing? Ice Spring is here! 01:23, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

No, my computer isn't seeing them. <font color="cyan" style="background:Black">☯Sgt. Pepper's☯ Lonely Hearts Club Band 01:45, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

I clicked on the image, and it shows the changed in the thumbnail, but not on the actual image. I normally give a few hours to notice the change, but it's already been quite some time, so upload the new version under a new file name and put the delete tag on the old one. -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   13:43, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ice Spring is here! 21:12, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hurhur, the changes really showed up! :D I can't blur the shading anymore, *sigh* Ice Spring is here! 21:29, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Can you blur the tail shading? Also make the ear pink more defined--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     21:31, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

No, I can't blur the tail shading. I really should get a copy of GIMP then download it....Reuploaded. Ice Spring is here! 21:35, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

The midriff shading needs blending too. And some of the stripes need to be extended further into the body. ✐S aN  dY  21:36, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The upload log doesn't like me... Ice Spring is here! 02:20, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink more.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:38, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think that in-between the legs it's colored in. If so, you should erase that. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  14:20, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add stripes to the front legs.-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:28, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Snowfeather, I can't because there is no room. Ice Spring is here! 16:57, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading some Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:23, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, and when I tried it, it ruined the stripes when I blurred it. Are there any opionons? Ice Spring is here! 02:08, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps just brighten the highlights then Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:44, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ice Spring is here! 20:56, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ice, you do need to add stripes to the leg. They are on his deputy pixel. Maybe you can see if you can find room to add them. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  22:21, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I found little space. Ice Spring is here! 23:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

There should be a stripe on the cream patch. There's one on his other images. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:41, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ice Spring is here! 19:57, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on his shoulder some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:22, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yayyy, I am getting a new computer this weekend. :3 Ice Spring is here! 21:08, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Congratz on the new computer. the highlights look extremly bright on my computer. They almost match the cream fur. can you darken them some without ruining your image? Haikage Ash's Talk 20:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

They don't look too dark on my computer. I'll see if I can darken them. Ice Spring is here! 21:06, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

No, it won't work. I darkened them with the burn tool, but it looked like it was painted on, and the 'paint' looked dried up. And when I blurred it, it ruined the stripes.. Ice Spring is here! 21:39, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Do you use GIMP? If you do I think there is a way to fix it. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:47, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I only use GIMP to make the image, and Pixlr to edit. GIMP doesn't work when I try to edit an image in it. Ice Spring is here! 22:00, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I can try for you if you'd like. What does everyone else think of the highlights before we make plans to change them? Haikage Ash's Talk 22:04, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Littlecloud (W) - For Approval
Well, here he is! Comments? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  15:23, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Add a couple of stripes to the head, and fill in the eye. :) -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   15:40, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Can you believe I didn't colour his eye? Well, added stripes and filled in eye. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  15:50, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest and head. Add stripes to the ear closest to us.-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  16:11, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the chest and head. Ears are now stripey. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  17:28, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think he should have a stripe on his neck/cheek area. It looks a little blank. <font face="Papyrus" color="#ffcc33">Raven <font face="Papyrus" color="#ff3366">Randomness!  20:36, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added a stripe to his neck. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  15:58, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I got nothing M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:46, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the tail and don't blur them as much. This is great!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  21:58, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened tail stripes and didn't blur. It looks better. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  22:04, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing is to darken the stripes on the head. I don't see anything other than that :D!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  22:55, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened head stripes. Anything else? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  11:20, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything. Does anyone have a say in this?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  19:42, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

His ear lineart seems blurred. Mo us et al on !  Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE!  16:48, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:21, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lol that's the stripes Mousey Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  12:02, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. PLEASE don't say to blur the stripes more. They will not! GRR! Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  21:28, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:10, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, do you have Littlecloud and Smudge up for approval?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:19, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, Nightshine's right. Bircy, you can't have two images up for approval at the same time. Littlecloud or Smudge, which will it be? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:00, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Umm.... Ugh I'll keep Littlecloud up. I think this one's closer to being approved and well. =/ Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  10:53, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Robinwing (TC) (W)-- For Approval
Here is Robinwing from ThunderClan. (This is the 34th post. there are 2 conversations) Comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  16:07, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. :) Birchy  I am a warrior at heart...  17:29, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading on the ear and legs that aren't facing us. If there is some there darken it. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:45, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are too small. Make them wider, and blur them Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:58, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did all the stuff above, now what else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  13:08, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are still kinda small. Spread them out a bit and blur them as well as the shading if you can. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:05, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Enlarged highlights and blurred shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  21:22, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the shading some more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     21:25, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred earpink and darkened shading. Anything else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:05, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ginger part a bit bigger? It seems a bit small. -- Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 23:05, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made ginger bigger. What else shall I change?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  23:45, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need alot of shading. Snowstorm!

How do I do that?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  11:44, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need to be expanded, they are far too concentrated. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  16:32, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this too expanded?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  18:02, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. The hind leg shading needs to be blended and blurred. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  19:43, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred hind leg shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:09, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry,I just woke up when I wrote that. The highlights need a lot of blurring, not shading. Sorry! Snowstorm!

You need to brighten the highlights and blur them. The shading also needs blurring. Ice Spring is here! 02:06, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Brightened and blurred highlights. Blurred shading. Anything else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:32, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the chest color well. Dark hallows 17:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened/darkened ginger patch (whichever one it looks like to you)-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  21:53, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:18, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  16:45, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderheart (A) - For Approval
Wow...this turned out better than I expected. Comments?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:53, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Thicken the shading a bit and blur. Make the ear pink a tad bigger and a bit darker--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:31, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  05:44, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on her back and haunch needs to be blurred more. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  21:49, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Just saying, I'll be on vacation until next Monday, so I won't be able to work on this for a week. I'll get right back on it once I'm back, though.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  19:14, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading more.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:17, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading and stripes alot more. A tip, I usually redid the hole image, then followed a tutorial on shading or didn't so shading at all! Hope it helps! <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 02:47, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) For Approval
~K I know there is a lot of Graystripe fans out there so here is his Loner image!!!...!!! LOL So, Constructments??? !(THANKS FOR REOPENING)!~  Moon  pelt   03:54, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

His front side looks too dark. Try darkening the highlights a bit. Make the back stripe thinner and a bit lighter. Also darken the ear pink and blur the belly shading a tad--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     04:11, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more red, too. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:52, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripe on his back and darken the Ear PInk (See Night's comment). Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  11:20, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried doing evrything you guys siad but nightshine Front side looks to dark, darken highlights Don't really get it but I tried LOL, Constructments??? Moon pelt   15:41, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is a bit big. Hedgehogflight Hedgehogs are flying! 19:24, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made ear pink smaller~ Constructments??? Moon pelt   20:21, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks good. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:48, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! <span style="color:silver;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">Starpelt Look at the stars 22:25, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur his stripe. Ice Spring is here! 15:58, April 5, 2010 (UTC)\

Reuploaded I tried but it was hard not to mess it up by blurring it to much so it's not a  HUGE  difference but there is one. Constructments???? <span style="color:silver;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">Starpelt Look at the stars 23:20, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more and this should be ready-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:23, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded~Constructments? <span style="color:silver;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">Starpelt Look at the stars 04:37, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Brook Where Small Fish Swim (Lo) - For Approval


I was soo scared by the April fools joke! And for Brook, she and Stormfur were loners when they traveled to the lake, and were instant loners when Leopardstar kicked them out.-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  10:44, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, I like the tabby pettern. Blur the shading and make the Ear Pink less 'baby pink', if you see what I mean? Also add a few stripes to her paws. Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  11:17, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Great job!! But it says she has a torn ear. Could you make that??? Moon pelt   17:18, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm glad my first Loner turned out well!-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  11:16, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. → •Maple  fern•  ←  17:10, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't it be Rouge? i thought cats that had homes which wasn't a clan or tribe was a loner. Rouges are cats that travel and have no home, aren't they? Birchy I am a warrior at heart...  22:11, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Birch, rogues are loners that are hostile. Is Brook hostile?-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  13:46, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  13:50, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

The blurring needs some work-  Møųş  ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  02:02, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Mouse!! You're back!reuploaded-- ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈  11:26, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! I love the tabby pattern! Try to make the eye more gray. Right now, it looks blue. Also, darken the earpink a little bit more. But this is good!<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval


'''Note: There are four discussions so this should be under the limit. If it isn't you can take it down.'''

(M) - I did this one in about 2 hours. Definately not my best work but I think it turned out okay. I gave it a furry texture but the white makes it impossible to see. Constructments? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:29, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really see any ear pink. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  21:38, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Whoops, that got obliviated sometime while I was blurring. Better? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:55, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:05, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is good Mossy! But, along with Night's comment, the patch on top of the head has a different shade than the others...but that might just be the highlight. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 22:04, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Photoshop won't load for some reason so in the meanwhile I fixed it on Pixlr. I darkened the ear pink (not to much though, becuase I didn't wan't to make it darker that his apprentice image). The different color on the patch on his head was caused by the highlight, but I didn't change it because, as I stated before, I'm on Pixlr. When I get back onto Photoshop I'll change it. I also renamed the file so it's no longer listed as an apprentice. (blush) What else should I fix? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:56, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (Ki)-For Approval
I know it says 37, but there are four discussions, so this is technically within the limit (take it down if otherwise). Not much else to say, so...comments? OMpath 3rd Place! 14:31, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Otherwise, this is really good!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  14:34, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, but some of the tabby stripes seem more blurred than others. Is there a way you can fix that. . . ? Møųş  ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  17:50, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Blur the shading just abit! :) Dawnleaf 19:30, April 3, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Moss, this is really awesome. Blur the markings and darken the shading. Ice Spring is here! 15:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ugh, I really hope the changes show! Thanks for the comments everyone! Wow, do my muscles hurt! Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 21:42, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar (W) - For Approval
I think there are 5 discussions, so I should be able to post her... I followed the colors of her leader image. Note - her shading may be a little hard tos ee because she is multicolored, but it's there. :3  ♥ C row  02:32, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing as always Crow. Make the tail stripes darker or find a way to define them more--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:43, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! :3 I tried to lighten the base and darken the stripes slightly... Is that enough?  ♥ C row  02:50, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller. Also try darkening the shading a bit more. This looks amazing. Do you use a tablet?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     02:52, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing but the style of stripes doesn't really match the stlye used on her other images. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:54, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened the shading a bit... How can I make them match more?  ♥ C row  02:56, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make them thinner. Like this: Moonflight Come The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 15:15, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes don't match the rogue or leader image, they need to match stripe for stripe. The ear pink also needs to not touch the lineart. It's such a beautiful image, though, it's a shame the stripes don't match! Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  02:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are done in a more realistic style, yes, but still look a little like the other images. I say keep it this way, she's so pretty!-- Dark hallows 05:32, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The patches need to be a creamy pinkish colour. I know it looks awkard (at least the colour by itself) but that is the colour of her leader image. → •Maple  fern•  ←  10:50, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Shady but I disagree. I do like this style of tabby stripes better than the ones on her other images but I do think they need to be changed to match. Her other Images were made first and the stripes on them are thinner and more rounded. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:13, April 7, 2010 (UTC)


 * For what it is worth, I agree with Shady. To me, this looks perfect; it is close enough to match the other stripes... ✐Sa  NdY  09:58, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Ash, but I agree with both Shady and Sandy. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:36, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Same with me. I think these stripes are beautiful.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:09, April 9, 2010 (UTC)



Does this match better? :) -- Bramble 18:38, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I wasnt saying that I didnt like the stripes I said they didnt match. Yes Bramble, thats a better match. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:04, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Do you need me to edit my rogue image then? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:27, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think Sandy, the senior warriors and I need to start organizing the next Tweak Week; mainly because we're getting so low on characters that need only one image. We'll get started on organzing that as soon as possible. In the meantime, don't worry about your rogue image yet, Mouse. We'll get it in time. Comments before approval on this image? -- Bramble 17:30, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (W) -- For Approval
Well, here's Ivytail. Not much to say about her. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:43, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good!! Blur it some more.Dawnleaf 13:14, April 4, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Darken the shading. Make the white chest smaller. Blur the white transitions, and the markings--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     18:13, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I fixed it. → •Maple  fern•  ←  20:07, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the patches seem more blurred than the others. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  22:17, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Here is some changes you need to make:Sorry, the text is really small. Green says make earpink bigger, and red says Spots are really blurres together.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 02:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Made earpink bigger and fixed overblurred patches. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur her chest. Ice Spring is here! 15:48, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

...On her queen image she has a bunch of patches, not little spots.-- Dark hallows 05:30, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add some cream patches, all of these look like ginger patches but her queen image has ginger patches and cream patches. ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  20:54, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Should I redo her? → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:23, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Only if you want to. I think if you just blur the patches together more and add some cream then it will be awesome-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:25, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Raggedpelt (W) - For Approval
This is my first try at doing a charart, so I'm sorry if it's really bad/if I did it wrong. How is it?<font color="#9900FF">Hollytail 00:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, first; the lineart is really strange, it's white, it should be black. Second, you need to save it in png format, not jpg. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

How do I fix the lineart? And could that have anything to do with the fact that I had issues with getting the blank onto pixlr?<font color="#9900FF">Hollytail 01:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did you delete the white inside the blank before you put the brown in? And what kind of trouble did you have? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Right-click->open in new tab for the image, and then you can edit it. The images in the gallery are shrunken a bit. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 01:25, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Over the area with the blanks it says to click to get the image at full size, but whenever I tried that, it wouldn't let me place it in pixlr, or save it to pictures. It came up in a box in the center of the screen and all that it would let me do was highlight it...Eventually I just used the thumbnail picture...<font color="#9900FF">Hollytail 01:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, you can't do that. Copy the file name of the blank and place it into the search bar. Then, go to the page and get the location, and you're good to go! Other than that, the image looks nothing like  Møųş  ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  01:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried fixing it in the right blank this time... How does it look now?<font color="#9900FF">Hollytail 02:30, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Use the color dropper to get the right coat color- he is still far too dark. And his stripes don't match the leader image. Don't worry, that problem is easy to fix. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  04:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Or use the sponge tool set to saturate on size 200 will do. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#9900FF">Hollytail 12:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still weird...Layer a regular warrior blank on the image. The shading needs more blurring and so does the stripes. And, the ear pink needs to be lighter. Ice Spring is here! 15:45, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Tried fixing it, but what is layering?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Why did you blur the ragged fur lines? Those should be solid! ☮Quail☮ <font color="Maroon">Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 15:36, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, sorry... is this better? And what is layering?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:51, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

The eye doesn't look right...look at this or this to see how it should look.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:33, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is really blurred and there is some missing on the head and paws. Also darken and blur the shading. Add another stripe to the haunch and try making it more brown like his leader image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:39, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (E)- For Approval
My first ever elder! I know it's bad. Comments? ♥ Willow  03:08, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So how do I make it not over the limit? ♥ Willow  03:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

You have to wait until some more images are approved. The limit is 35 chararts up for approval. I bet plenty will be approved by tomorrow and you can put this up :) -- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

K thanks you're really helpful :3 BTW, I like your new siggy! ♥ Willow  03:33, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! A senior warrior, Bramble or Sandy will decline this soon-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This can stay up Willowpool as it's now under 35 ✐Sa  NdY  16:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone? I haven't got any comments yet. It's not declined, is it? ♥ Willow  20:53, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

No, it isn't. My main comment is that the shading needs blending. ✐Sa NdY  21:03, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How is it now?

A lot better! Just darken and blur the shading and try to make the ear pink less purpley. You forgot to sign :3-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:27, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Purpley? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 01:18, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Purple. Make it more pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:30, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. XP I think it's the same! (Pulls hair) <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 01:37, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone?Doesn't it look like its smudged too much? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 03:48, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

It does look a little too smudged. Blur it together more and that will fix it.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:14, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

How about I make the pelt color darker like his deputy image? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 22:25, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Which is better, do you think? I know I post a ton but this is my 1st charart for approval so...<font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 23:47, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I would definately say to keep the second one. Blur the shading on it, and make the ear pink more of a reddish color like his deputy image Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:16, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded. Ok. I fixed the earpink and blurred it. How's it now? By the way, what's CBA? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 19:40, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

CBA means Comments Before Approval. But only the leader, deputy, and senior warriors can use it. Which excudes me! And about Cinderfur, the lineart on the tail looks thin. You should make it look normal, and blur the shading a bit more. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  21:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''How's it now? <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 16:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is it declined or approved?<font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 04:10, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more and darken the tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W) - For Approval


Right. So here it is,my first charart- I admit,its not perfect,is it? In fact I dont think she will be aproved. I will do a little more work on her if thats the case. So please comment and tell if Yellowfang (W) is good enough! -- Clar ris  sa! :)  08:21, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's good for a frist try :) try copying her MC image and then get the ear pink from that, and also shhe doesn't need ear pink on her back ear. Add eye color as well. Also try and make the scarrs more like they are on the MC image. And last of all, no need to put the image in a Thumb :) Shruggy talk 11:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It has to be full size, not thumbnail. That's also the (probably) the reason that the apprentice blanks show up blurry on pixlr. Click on them, then save to your computer. You might need to redo it, but maybe someone could resize it...? → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:34, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, other than that:

1.) The ear pink is far to bright. It should be a natural color- see Yellowfang

2.) The scars are unrealistic and do not match her med. cat image

3.) I don't see color in her eye. When you get the right blank, fill it in, using the tutorials for reference

4.) The shading is too concentrated, see the tutorials for different shading styles.

Other than that, waaaaaaaaaaaay better than my first failure attempt. Mo us et al on !  Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE!  11:46, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I will do that then. Thanks! And by the way,what tutorials should I use? Clar ris  sa! :)  12:00, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There are many tutorials to look at but you can look at them all to find the right style here. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  12:09, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried my best,second time round,what do you think}} -- Clar ris  sa! :)  08:10, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Remember, do not put it as a thumbnail when you put it on the page, make it full sized. I can't really see the ear pink21:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC) Mo    us    et    al    on    !!

The line art is a little blurred.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:31, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

So is it aproved? Clar ris  sa! :)  17:06, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Not quite yet. The lineart is a little blurred and needs fixing, and the shading needs blending more. ✐Sa NdY  17:24, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

To make the shading look neater and more like her medicine cat image, smudge the shading a little to give it that kind of texture. Right now it looks like a spotlight. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 21:50, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. No need to add the furry highlights I did.  Dark hallows 05:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried to blur the shading :P Does it look better? Clar ris  sa! :)  07:57, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still really blurry. Do you need help fixing it? And the eye colour doesn't look right either-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:03, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Millie (Lo) - For Approval


With four images going to be approved today, one withdrawn, and 7 not images, this will be the 35th. Not much to say other than that, I'm pretty happy on how she turned out. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:40, April 5, 2010 (UTC)I

It looks okay,but maybe you could blur it a little more? Other than that,much better than mine! Clar ris  sa! :)  14:57, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It doesn't look any different, but I blurred it as much as it will go without looking odd.-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 15:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes,its much better,I think it could be aproved now. Clar ris  sa! :)  15:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you could lighten the ear pink a bit? Snickers 20  Click here! 15:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Minnow. :) All I see is just the shading could be blurred a tad more. Ice Spring is here! 15:43, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading so it's less visible. :) Fawnstorm  Never miss a beat..  16:50, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for all of your nice comments! It's good to know that after months of being away I haven't forgot anything. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 18:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Try making the stripes a bit darker and darken the ear pink a tad. Also make her tail tip gray.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:12, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

In the manga, her collar was on. Should we leave it as it is, or add a collar? Plus, the fur doesn't really match the color of all of her kittypet, warrior, and apprentice images. See Millie.-- ☮Quail☮ <font color="Maroon">Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 12:52, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I will do as Night shine said, and make two, one with and one without a collar and then put them both up. To Quail, the color can't really be helped because I used the eye dropper and these are the colors it gave me. Last I will get to this as soon as I can. It's almost ten and I still have to do my Latin homework. If I finish latin in time I will try to get it on, but I will get it up by tomorrow at the latest.-- Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:31, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened stripes, ear pink, noticed that I only needed one with a collar, added a collar (a bad one) anything I missed? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 22:03, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her kittypet image has a red collar. Can you make the line on the collar more stright. Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:11, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the collar color and I tried to make it as straight as I could. Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 14:37, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - For approval
ok its my first charat ever. I know it's bad but still..... Comments? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  16:12, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but even with two discussions this is over the limit of 35. Just when I thought we had that problem sorted... Declining as I'm fed up with having to clean up the page already today. Please resubmit this when the page goes below 35 images. Thanks Snickers, and it's not just you so don't feel bad. ✐Sa NdY  16:19, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Its quite good but as Sandy said,below 35. Clar ris  sa! :)  17:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It might have changed since Sandy's comment but this is the 35th image. Haikage Ash's Talk 19:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So, is it ok? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  19:49, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's fine now. The background needs to be transparent, not black though. ✐Sa NdY  19:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded Better? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  20:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

wait. I have this reserved. Can't i do her? Echo Kit  21:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Echo your reservation is over two weeks old. Snickers has the right to do this image . Haikage Ash's Talk 21:23, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

oh... I was about to but her up but oh well. Echo Kit  21:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lining on the right ear is not there, and I can't see the highlights really well. What program did you use? ~Ec hos  tar  22:04, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is gaps in the line art in various places.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 22:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded crosses fingers Better?

It looks as if you're using paint to do this image. You need to use pixlr of some other image program. The shading needs to be blurred. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading more. Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  11:23, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

You are familiar with blurring, right? And some of the lineart was drawn over. Birthdaypath Let's go April 7! 22:53, April 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * It looks as if you tried to draw some of the lineart back...The ear pink needs to be blurred around the edges and this white is too bright so the shading won't show up as much and it'll make it harder. Look at her other images for reference:



To make it easier for you use the color droppler so you can take the base color from one of these images. Don't take the shading at all though and you are using pixlr right? Because it still looks as if you're using paint. If not there's always GIMP you can download :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  22:27, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I'm using pixlr. I'll work on it : ) Silverstar  Leader of Shineclan!  22:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Weaselfur (A) - For Approval
✐Sa NdY  14:37, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Blur the shading a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   14:52, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wow Sandy! This is really good! But as Nightshine said, blur. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...14:57, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks both of you. I did my best with the blurring; not even GIMP will do it any more for me. ✐Sa NdY  15:40, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink. ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  20:48, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

On his warrior image the ear pink is really pale also. Make the paws a little more white. They look kind of grey-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:24, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐Sa  NdY  11:03, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  21:19, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:22, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you might have blurred in some of the Lineart with the white paws. It looks kinda grey around the orange-meets-white bit. Make the ear pink a little less red. This is awesome! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:34, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐Sa  NdY  21:12, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Petalnose (KP) For Approval
Yay! I'm pretty proud of this one :) Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 16:43, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wonderful job, Night:) The ear pink needs to be more triangular, though. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö        17:45, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Triangulafied ear pink XD Btw, I LOVE the new siggie!! Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:14, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Night! Its really amazing. What colour is the tag meant to be? It looks a bit dull grey. Try and make it more silver or gold. But this is amamzing! Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:45, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

My cats don't have collars anymore, but when they did, they had little silver bells instead of gold tags Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:16, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cool! :) Can you make it more of a silver colour? It's kinda grey at the mo. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:32, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Well, I lightened it. Did that make it any better? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:41, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Brilliant. Sorry if you think I'm picking Night. ;) Its a really amazing pic, I can't see anything else wrong. Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  08:35, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐Sa NdY  09:55, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight Blank
For Briarlight's blank I am going to do a deformed warrior blank. I was wondering if I could have some help making it? Thanks. Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:43, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, of course I'll pitch in. Also, are we going to have her hind legs twisted backwards, or not? Cause she broke her backbone and can't move her hind legs. <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 14:17, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I thought her hind paws would be out behind her so it looks like she is dragging herself along. So her back legs are behind her, if you see what I mean? Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 14:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, here it is. I can't make the legs or paws look normal, though... <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 01:45, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Here is mine: --  N i g h t s h i n e    {   02:16, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oooaaahhh! I like! But I think the hindlegs are too much like a teddy bears, thick and fluffy. Could you make them a bit thinner? Please? ;) <font color="#33ccff">Ham and Eggs <font color="#33ccff" style="background:teal;">a days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 02:50, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I made them a bit thinner. But Fawnstorm can edit the blank the way she wants.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:01, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thank-you Night! Its ''amazing! ''I'll get to work on it right a way! Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:36, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

What about me! ):( <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 13:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yours too! For the base-line! Fawnstorm This is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 14:23, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tail she be down too. It doesn't look right to me for some reason with the legs down and the tail just sticking up. It looks funny.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  21:34, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Shimmerpool. If she cant move her legs she probably cant move her tail. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:45, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, because cat's tails are attatched to their spines Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, here she is I made her tail thick, because she's swollen, remember? So are her hind legs, so it pretty much all fits together! <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 02:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think they meant the tail should be down, not up even more. I don't think it should be swollen either. I'm pretty sure the swelling went down by the time she earned her warrior name. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:05, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

k, what about her hindlegs then? They look swollen. I quit! ):( <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 23:27, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

No need to be throwing a fit about this now....I had this more in mind.
 * The tail could be edited if its too thick if you want. :)-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  00:47, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Here is the tail thinned out. I didn't add transparency because I was lazy-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:31, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rosetail (Ki) - For Approval
Constructments? -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 22:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Darken the ear pink and tail stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:35, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Like Nighty said, darken ear pink and maybe blur the stripes a little more? Silverstar Leader of Shineclan!  22:38, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Fantastic. Darken the body stripes just a little bit, and do evertihng that everone else said. ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  01:05, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened ear pink and stripes and blurred stripes. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ          ö 21:58, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome! Should blur stripes on the haunch and left paw/leg, whatever! (:s <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 23:30, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - For Approval
I counted, and this is image number 35, but if I counted wrong feel free to take this down or decline this. I did horrible on the ear lineart, and the shading's a bit awkward because of the pelt color. Comments and suggestions? ♪  Ice  throat  氷喉   ♫   ☀  01:01, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. This is awesome!-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:19, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Good job! Try to make the nick in her ear a little bit more noticeable, but not too much.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 03:16, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit yellower than her other images, could you make it a bit more golden? I love it though :)  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 10:37, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ooooh! Pretty! But like Insane said, make it a bit golden. Otherwise it's great! <font color="thistle" style="background:white">Willow★ Do you want fries with that? 16:18, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hazeltail (A)-For Approval
I think she's number 35, but comments? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  10:33, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. And she needs ear pink. ✐Sa NdY  10:42, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added ear pink, (how could I have forgotten that!), and tried to blur the shading. I think that the ear pink needs to be less gray does anybody agree with me or have any suggestions? ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  10:57, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink isn't gray, at all. You should make the ear pink brighter. <font color="black" style="background:tomato">17silverthistle Welcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 13:51, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Hazeltail is the best :) Darken the shading a bit more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   14:16, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Dang! I was gonna put my charart up for approval! Oh well. Image, blur the shading and highlights and lighten the earpink like silver said.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:43, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading, blurred shading, and brightened ear pink. ɆƆH ØĦƏ  @ƦƮ  20:21, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:58, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Dawn River- For Approval
First Sharpclaw up. This should be right on the image limit. What do you guys think of my new tortie style? Highlights on the left and none on the right.(Thanks again Hawk!) Sakura Kiss Haikage 22:39, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

What a beautiful image, Ash. I see Nightshine's lovely blanks were approved during my absence; they work really well. I prefer the one on the left, with the highlights, personally. The eyes on the right look more natural to me, though. If you decide to use the left image, then use those eyes and blur the ear pink. That's all I see. -- Bramble 23:03, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Here is what the eyes for Jay's Wing will look like. Maybe that will help. I like the left one more. Just lighten and blur the ear pink a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:57, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the eyes on the right are fine. Echo Kit  01:04, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I like Night's style. This is truely amazing! The eyes on the right are my fave's as they look natural, like Bramble said. But I'd keep the highlights! Its really, really good Ash! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:31, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks everyone. I'll keep the image with the highlights(the left one) but I don't know what to do about the eyes. They're the same on both images. I just erased the highlight layer from the one on the right. Sakura Kiss Haikage 20:52, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silly me. That was the wrong highlighted one. Hows this? Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Really good! The ear pinkis a bit red, even though its a tortie, can you sort it out? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:00, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Most torties with darker ears have redish earpinks. Poppyfrost Is the only one I can think of right now. What does everyone else think? Sakura Kiss Haikage 11:35, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Ash! I only meant like make it lighter, sort of. :) What colours does a tortie consist of? Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:33, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC)-For Approval
Here she is! Second sharpclaw! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, why am I so slow!? I really want to put my charart up! Image wise, this is good. Just blur the shading and highlights. Also, darken the earpink and make it smaller. But this is good.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:06, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Note: I am dping this while Briarlight is being worked on :) Blurred shading and made the Ear Pink darker and smaller. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:29, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading... Could you make it more noticeable??? I think you blurred it a little to much... Mo onp  elt   ۞  18:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about that Moonplet. :) I think I got over-excited. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:24, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Shredtail(W) - For Approval
I haven't put a charart up for ages! How is he?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:30, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing Night! Can you just make the Ear Pink a bit paler and darker the highlights :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:23, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink and darkened highlights-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:50, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights need blurring- they're too bright. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:58, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops the changes didn't show. I hope they're fixed now-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (W) - For Approval
Comments? -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 23:56, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Love it!! Just blur the stripes a bit more and darken the ear pink. Also make the ear pink smaller-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:59, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 00:45, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr I want to post mine so bad!!!! XP Image wise, blur the stripes and darken the earpink more. Also blur the highlights. Me want to post it so bad<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 04:04, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

You'll get it posted soon :) Image Wise: This is really, really good. Make the ear pink smaller and darken it. Well done! Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:31, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 00:32, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:26, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 01:41, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (A) - For Approval
With two discussions, two images in CBA, one declined, and me withdrawing Dawncloud, this is allowed (I hope.) Comments? kü§ Ån  Ågï  20:56, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone? kü§ Ån  Ågï  15:43, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the Ear Pink and add some more highlights. This is good! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:49, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Halftail (W)- For approval
http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100410012824/warriors/images/1/17/SparrowpeltW.png

How is it?

Sorry this is over the limit; you forgot to sign-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:32, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

No this is within the limit. Darken the whole thing. Sakura Kiss Haikage 11:33, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Use a less saturated shade of brown like the one in his elder image. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 15:49, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Tabby stripes need to be blurred. Dawnleaf 18:37, April 10, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Sootfur (Ki)-
Not much to say about it.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 18:41, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the Ear Pink more visible. Blur the shadin and lighten the nose pink. This is really good. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  18:45, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 19:10, April 10, 2010 (UTC)