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Feathertail (Sc) - Redone
i apologize, for it has been quite a white since i made art here. anyway, redid to be more silver-gray, like her momma. 16:33 Sat Aug 1

This should be named Feathertail.star.png, Splook; why didn't you just upload over the original? She needs the bushy tail, define the shading a tad, and darken the stripes just a bit. 16:47 Sat Aug 1

Give Splook a break. She /just/ came back. Can you lighten the paw shading? This is beautiful, Splook. I'm going to have a really hard time matching this ._. 17:01, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. i told you i hadn't done this in awhile so i apologize that i didn't name it correctly. 21:52 Sat Aug 1

Do you mind smudging/blurring the tail stripes a tad? This is beautiful Splook. =) 22:35, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. thank you! :> 00:30 Sun Aug 2

Could u smudge the ear pink more? And define the shading on the legs. Nice work! 01:22, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? I think her tail should be more... fuzzy? A tail wouldn't be smooth edged like this? I'm not sure. Also, I think you shouldn't change the entire style of her stripes, as it was agreed to be redone for the color(by most of the voters), I believe. It was asked to be redone only because it would be hard to tweak it. It's not fair for the OA when the entire pattern gets redone just because the base color is too dark.

I literally copied the pattern from a picture of an actual silver-tabby cat. There are a lot of chararts that are redone and look completely different than the original image, and what the OA had depicted. I was trying to go for realism, and use a real-life tabby design. If anyone else feels like I should redo my entire image, then say so, but no one ever said that I had to redo to match the original tabby design. The entire set of chararts were being redone anyways. 16:34 Sun Aug 2

She's silver-gray instead of silver in the first place. I thouht silver-gray cats don't have black stripes unless they're said to have them??? If realism is everything, I would nominate half of PCA's images

I think her stripe style is fine. As she said, she copied it frm an actual picture and /no one/ said that the original pattern had to be kept. That's basicaly the reason it was nominated anyways. 16:53, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shadow in the earpink and the shading on the head? :) 17:06, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten her base just a tiny bit- I think it's still too dark in places, but tweaking the base might help solve that issue. Also, the stripes are fine- no one said that keeping the stripe pattern was mandatory, therefore Splook is allowed to choose whatever pattern she so wishes.

can you lighten her base pelt a bit? i think that was a reason it was nominated too since shes supposed to be silvery i guess 18:59, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Her base is light enough, just the light needs to be defined.

I disagree- I don't think it's light enough. Given that she was asked twice to do so, I think it could use a bit of lightening up. I didn't say too much, though. Probably just a shade or two. She seems more neutral gray, when she's been said multiple times to have the same silver pelt as her mother.

Do you mind removing the small spot/stripe off the nose? Its fine if you disagree, however. Its just a preference. 03:08, August 3, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry for this to come out and if it's bothering - but can you make the pupil rounder and bigger? It's really just preference too. And perhaps make them more focused to one side? It currently looks kind of like she's looking at both sides which seems...strange but for me only. I still think the stripes should be dark gray instead of black, because she's silver-gray and not silver. If everyone still disagree with me, fine. The light should be defined anyway whether the base is light enough or not.

The eyes are fine, honestly. I make mine like that and many a times have they gotten approved- eye style is artist's choice, and just because it's not big and extravagant doesn't mean it's not acceptable. Also, Splook says that she got everything from a picture of a silver cat- there is nothing wrong with the stripe color. When I search "silver-gray cats", I get a bunch of silver tabbies.

Idk if I'm repeating anyone's comments, but can u define or darken the shading? I can't see it. 06:51, August 4, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes on the tail look too thick. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 16:15, August 4, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded, except for the fluffy tail. i'll do that on the next reupload, cause i have like no time to do it tonight (band camp started and im super busy), so i thought i might as well do what i can. 20:56 Tue Aug 4

Could you define the shading a bit? I don't know... It seems a little hard to see. 00:48, August 5, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:48 Sat Aug 8

There's pink above her ear. Songheart (talk) 14:30, August 8, 2015 (UTC)Songheart

Smudge the earpink a bit. 01:46, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:05 Mon Aug 10

The eyes look seperated, maybe make the more visible eye toward the inner part more? 23:55, August 10, 2015 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice, and there is nothing wrong with the style Splook has chosen. This is to everyone: please do not ask her to change it again.

Spiderstar's eyes are pretty much in the exact same position, and there was no issue when I was making his art. If the eyes bother you guys that much, then I'll change them, but I really think it's too trivial of a thing to change. 02:26 Tue Aug 11

Spiderstar's eyes do bother me a little bit tbh... Just saying, not asking you to change it. Can you smooth out the shading on the main body? Also, about her tail, I'm not entirely sure but I think the tail should go in the same width all the way? On your image her tail is kind of fluffed out almost at the end, and I don't think tail fur grows that way...?

If it bothers you, sorry, but it's not gonna be changed. Splook, I think you should go back to your original tail. This tail seems a little more poofy at the end and your original tail just looked a lot better in general. 16:01, August 11, 2015 (UTC)

That was extremely offensive, Icy. There's nothing wrong with the previous image's lineart, and if she was asked to go back to the original lineart, then that's what she'll use.

Cloudy, I told Splook in Skype. I told her exactly what I said up there, and she was fine. She said just to put it on the talk page. 18:15, August 11, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded, this is my original tail. tell me what to do from here. also, i got tired of the eye talk, so i changed the eye, hope you like it :-) 01:42 Wed Aug 12

Tbh, this should use the old tail linear art- There was nothing wrong with it, this was nominated for a redo because of the pattern, the tail was completely fine. 08:53, August 13, 2015 (UTC)

Splook's been told that several times. She knows. Can we stop busting her hump? 02:39, August 14, 2015 (UTC)

She was talking about the lineart from Scarlet's version, not her first version... If she knows, then perhaps she could change it?

i know you're talking about scarlet's version. i'm working on it, alright? 02:46 Fri Aug 14

Hey, don't shoot me for it. tbh, it wasn't very clear after David's comment as to which lineart should be used...

Redstar (Star) ~ Redone
oa was leaf-storm, redone for triangle and y stripes and not being dark enough. i lost the file for the leader (rowanstar saved over it somehow???) so i didn't have colours and layers, but i did what i could 04:11 Sat Aug 8

Could you define the stripes? Idk but I see them more on the leader (if you get me) 04:20, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Are you sure you are still working on this, Berry? 08:51, August 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I am. I've got it ready to upload, but it's been a bad week and I'd just forgotten. I'll get someone to upload it for me soon. 08:57 Thu Aug 13

Re-uploaded. I did what I could. As I said I've lost the file so the colours aren't spot on. 00:23 Fri Aug 14

Feathertail (A) - Redone
OAs are Dazzy and Mounty. Redone because... issues. I did try to match the StarClan, it's probably the shading that makes it look different. 07:30, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Do you mind darkening the shading overall a tad? 09:40, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:18, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

um what was wrong with the old tail lineart? this applies to the star too. 18:48, August 8, 2015 (UTC)

I always wanted to say that Skt... Mind defining light on her shoulder and hind leg?

The stripes on the star Clan image look darker mind darkening it too? 23:58, August 10, 2015 (UTC)

Oh right, the tail stripes don't seem to match the StarClan one in general?? Not sure about this.

Re-upoaded Damn it, got caught up in my new school sorry for the late reup 08:47, August 13, 2015 (UTC)

Is there a way you could tweak the tint? It doesn't look like it matches her StarClan image in terms of color.

There's a few stray white pixels among the ta il. 02:44 Fri Aug 14

Re-uploaded @Skye: I'd love to, but unfortunately I can't find the file and appear to have lost it ;__; I fixed the tail and tried playing around with it... But this is the best i could do. 13:09, August 14, 2015 (UTC)

Feathertail (W) ~ Redone
OA is Raelic. I hope I matched this well enough >.< I can redo the stripes easily if not 23:55, August 9, 2015 (UTC)

The star image's stripes seems a bit more smudgeg/blurred. Can you smudge/blur it a bit more? 21:44, August 11, 2015 (UTC)

reup 03:05, August 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the pelt a bit

~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 18:59, August 12, 2015 (UTC)

Is the pelt color actually darker on the StarClan, or is it the shading? I honestly can't tell. I will darken it, I'm just wondering as I color picked from the lightest part of that. 00:06, August 13, 2015 (UTC)

It might very well be my shading that makes the StarClan look dark. The pelt color is #e5e5e5. <span style="">01:30 Thu Aug 13

I will check my image soon. I have to pack up my computer and won't have it back out til Saturday after I am moved into my dorm and finish the meetings I have to attend >.< 18:01, August 13, 2015 (UTC)

Good luck with your move!! When you get to checking your image, could you possibly smooth out the neck/head/facial shading?

Reedshine (W) - Tweaked
OA is Paleh, tweaked to be darker.

Could you darken her more? 08:48, August 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Hello Cloudskye! (Or you're SnowedLightning now, I assume) Your image looks as beautiful as ever! Do you ever mind defining those shading on those front paws? Stunning. =) 02:49, August 14, 2015 (UTC)

I'm just tweaking it- the image belongs to Paleh! But I will gladly do so and reupload in a minute or two! (and yes, I am SnowedLightning now!!)

Re-uploaded. Also tweaked a couple other spots that looked slightly flat and played with the coloring again.

OA is Maplepool, Redone artists are *Wildfire* and Ducksplash and tweaker is Stoneclaw. Tweaked to add protruding canine teeth. 06:15, August 15, 2015 (UTC)