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Thornclaw (Alt. A) - For Approval
He has one for the kit, and the cite is real this time. I double-checked with some people in chat. Described as ginger. Comments? 19:04, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. 19:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color more ginger-y. He looks brown, and define the shading and highlights. 19:09, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

And fix the earpink on both ears. The pink is covering little bits of lineart. 19:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink's match and redder 21:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:59, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

I should know it's real, I added it. XD anyway, there's lighter ginger on his face, so maybe make the body that colour? Skt Spoilers... 22:07, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. You have barely any shading, there's no light source, there's miscoloured lineart, and I can hardly see the stripes. You have one week. 02:35, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

And just a warning, it's currently being discusses whether Brackenfur and Thornclaw's main description should be ginger, so this may end up being declined.... we'll have to wait and see for other's opinions on the discussion, but technically since they were first mentioned as ginger, it's quite likely they'll be changed. 05:56, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, why would it be declined? If it was changed, couldn't this just become the normal apprentice? Skt Spoilers... 06:02, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Not for sure. More likely that the normal apprentice would be tweaked, as it's an extremely simple tweak. Eh, I don't know, we'll decide when and if it happens. 11:12, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Euploadedray(Re-uploaded) Good? 12:06, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe make the fur more orange to match the kit better? 19:59, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and make the stripes match the kit. ^^ Skt Gatlocke and the Kitty Kats 22:42, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear, and then smudge it and make the color match the kit. Also define the shading. 05:14, 29, 06, 2012

Define the ear-pink  16:02, June 29,2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the ear. 16:32, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add eye depth. 16:46, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the kit? 14:32, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, Sky already said that. 14:44, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I thought Boss said Re-Uploaded after it. e.e 14:46, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Yes, I was caught in the east coast storm so I was left without cable for the past two days. And Re-uploaded.-- 18:01, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think that this about 80% done. Does anyone else agree? 18:31, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't count but, yes. Fill the earpink in more. 17:00, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

This looks pretty 80% to me; heading changed. Blur the shading tons, and make the colour and stripes match the kit. 17:03, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes match the other apprentice image? 00:00, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? ☯ ~ S t o n e c l a <font color="#6E6E6E" face="Comic Sans MS">w <font color="#523014" face="Comic Sans MS">~ <font color="#000000" face="Comic Sans MS">☯ 06:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, but my dad put stupid restraints on the computer so I can only access it between 8 A.M.-8 P.M. for 1 hour. x.x-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)-- 12:27, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:58, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on his ear. 13:02, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear and nose pink more pink like the kit, and fill the earpink in the whole ear and then smudge/blur it. 15:01, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:33, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- 17:34, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes so it matches the kit? 17:36, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up into the ear. 21:14, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more and smoothen out the highlight on the haunch. 23:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I just realized I forgot to define the shading, so I'll do that now. x.x-- 13:34, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and thicken the stripes a tad. 20:15, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:48 Mon Jul 9

Blur the stripes just a bit?-- 02:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a bit too. 02:44, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I'll thicken the stripes when someone tells me how.-- 12:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Excuse me? You do know it's a privilege to be able to do this image. It's not your own personal right. You being rude and demanding for someone to tell you how to do something is only going to get this declined. You could've said, "I'm sorry, I don't know how, can someone help me?" and we'd be willing and glad. But now I'm debating on not helping you and letting you figure it out for yourself. If you don't understand me, just re-read what you've written and think about how extremely rude and degrading it is. 16:31, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And Boss, what you said was uncalled for. Part of making these images is doing them on your own. We're not going to tell you how to do something. e.e

Sorry. It's just been my life has been a bit hectic lately, so I've been in a more grumpy and demanding mood. My apologies to all that I may have offended.-- 13:05, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

-I'm a little scared to comment but...- Define the shading some more, and smudge the earpink. It looks too straight-edged to me. 14:36, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Cranky people. XD To thicken the stripes, just run your brush over them so that the stripes themselves increase in size. If you're matching the kit, you also might want to take your brush and connect some of them. It'll take a bit of time, though. Breeze whisker  17:45, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hope it worked...-- 12:43, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Toward the back area, near the shoulder and on the tail on --> this side, the stripes blend in with the shading...fix that :3 13:33, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes more and smudge the earpink into the ear. -- 19:01, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and make sure that the stripes show through the shading on the back; maybe try shading with a different color? 13:33, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:40, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more please. <span style="">13:00 Sun Jul 15

Re-Uploaded-- 13:17, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading, and darken the stripes. 23:24, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 12:06, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. -- 07:47, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 20:30, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes on his back, they get lost in the shading. 02:37, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

This may just be my monitor, but I can't see the earpink very well. Could you lighten it some? 20:49, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's just your monitor. I took it straight from the earpink template thingy.-- 21:46, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded-- 21:52, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and enlarge the "highlights" and make the stripes go all the way to the edge of his back and tail. 04:40, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad more to match the alt. kit. 06:10, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Boss, are you still working on this? If you are, the ginger seems a little too...saturated, I believe is the right word. Did you try asking Rowan for the hex code for the base pelt? Also, define the stripes on the belly/midriff area, as they get lost in the shading.

Re-Uploaded I hope I blurred the highlights right...-- 12:32, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more, and possibly change the shading color as it's probably that that makes the color not match. <span style="">07:49, 23, 07, 2012

Define the "highlight" on his shoulder, or at least make it match the other in colour. 15:26, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar(Lo)- For Approval
I'm not really sure how an auto-decline works.... sorry if I've done something wrong. Comments? Changes aren't showing, but pretty much all I did was erase the waste. 16:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The eye color looks like cream. 16:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fill in the white pixels. 16:35, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please try and make it match? The stripes are still off, and the cream is the wrong colour and in a different spot on her face than the leader. 16:38, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well, she's facing a different way than the rogue and queen, and most of the leader is the other side of her. 16:40, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

If your having troubles with the colors just try to take them from one of her other images. Just because she´s facing the other way I still think the stripes should be the same. But that could also be the artists opinion... Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave!h  17:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not change them. 17:10, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, fixed the cream and teh eyes. 17:21, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and get rid of the waste. 18:09, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes need to match. It doesn't matter what direction they're coming from, Storm. =.=;;

Reuploaded. Copied stripes to the best of my abilities... 19:50, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all over the image. 19:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and smudge them just a tad..

Reuploaded, blurred stripes and cleared...some waste. I'll get the rest soon. 20:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and there should be some y-stripes in there. 21:00, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

What art program do you use? I can give you a tip that will get rid of all the waste with just a click of a button in GIMP! 00:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I used Pixlr for this but I have GIMP. Thanks, Ivy! 01:48, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ears, added Y stripes and filled in white pixles, comments? 03:23, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad, and make them a tiny bit more rippley - like the leader. Also, they look tintet green... Could you fix that? Also, redden the earpink, erase the waste, and darken the shading a tad. =3 05:12, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm waiting until my sister's computer's out of the shop (Tuesday, around this time) because her GIMP doesn't close on me everytime. I got everything but the waste, whcih I promise to erase tomorrow. 05:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hm... I think I erased it all. Just seeing what I can do before I'm allowed to use GIMP. 14:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I didn't reply sooner :S On your lineart layer, select the region on the outside of the lineart. Keep your selection, then go on the shading layer. Go to the settings at the top. Edit---> clear. It should clear out all waste. Then go to Select---> none. 16:41, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivy =) 17:03, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

ass more stripes and define the shading. 20:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

BAHAHAHHAHAHHZAHAHAHHAHA Ok I'm done xD...BBAHAHAHAHAH Make some of the stripes on the haunch y stripes too. 21:03 Tue Jul 10

There's a little bit of waste under the front left paw. Breeze whisker  01:00, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Add cream paws. 02:20, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I um... aDDed some more stripes, Elo(xD) and made some Y stripes on the haunch, added cream paws, and I think I got all the waste. 15:14, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste, the white pixels are back, and blur the paws. 15:53, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded killed waste/blurred paws changes not showing e.e 16:14, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes more brown...they look reddish imo. 16:30, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

define the shading a tad. 19:00, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the cream on her chest. 16:46, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded/ 19:00, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste above her back. 02:10, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. If you don't want any waste, set the shading layer to multiply. 02:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink ,10:30, July 14,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:32, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly shading and erase the waste. `

Reuploaded 23:05, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the top of the haunch, add more shading on the hind leg, and define the depth in her eye 23:07, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the stripes. 00:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look still a bit reddish, make them more browner. <span style="">02:50, 15, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 02:27, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Y'know what I haven't done in a long time? It has something to do with this picture being really good <3 CBA? 04:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but the stripes seemed more blurred and then less blurred in some areas. Could you fix that. Also, define the "highlights" on the legs, and define the depth of the shading. 15:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

.....Reuploaded v.v 15:39, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-CBA  15:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but can you make the color of the stripes match her other images more? Right now they look kind of dark reddish/brownish. 20:13, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks! Reuploaded. 20:40, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing CBA? 21:32, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry again, but the color of the stripes still don't match. But other than that, this is pretty.<3 07:52, July 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:23, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

-sigh- I can give you the colours from her rogue, since these really don't match. The base is #513017, the stripes #39210d, and the cream #cf9f6b. It's also shaded in black and the highlights are white, if yours aren't. 04:44, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded; please don't ask me to change the colors again, I used the EXACT hex codes Loonie showed me and I shaded with black. 01:18, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Kill the waste and define the earpink. 01:40, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:54, July 21, 2012 (UTC)

And CBA? <span style="">06:21, 22, 07, 2012

I'm sorry, but these stripes still don't quite match. Try looking at the warrior version for an idea of how they should look. Also, define the shading and there's a tad bit of waste around the paws.

Mistystar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Called dark gray in The Darkest Hour. Comments? 19:25, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights, define the earpink, define the shading on the paws and tail, and make the highlights smaller. 19:27, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reuploaded 19:48, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. 19:49, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt color a bit. She's too dark.

Define the earpink. 19:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch shading, it looks blotchy. Also, shouldn't this be Alt2 warrior because her alt warrior is on CBA?20:20, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

No, Moon. That's Bluestar and this is Mistystar. xD 20:26, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

facepalm* That's why i shouldn't comment when I'm dead tired. XDDD21:33, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is also edging away from the lineart, can you fix that? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:21, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you even out the shading on the paws? It looks like they're darker than the rest of the pelt.

What do you mean, darken the highlights? 18:11, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tone them down... 18:35, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think the changes are showing. 18:37, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink and rename the file Mistystar.warrior.alt.png. 18:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know how to rename an image. 18:55, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploded 19:04, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Upload a new image called Mistystar.warrior.alt.png and tag this^ one for deletion. 19:06, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-ish 19:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and define the shading. 19:47, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine. 19:53, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Too late. Reuploaded Ear-pink and shading fixed. 19:59, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and enlarge the earpink and move the shoulder highlight closer to her chest. 20:44, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her tail and lighten her paws a tad; it looks like she has darker legs. 02:35, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the earpink more triangular. 10:49, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The paws and tail shading are the same lightness as the rest. 22:09, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the head shading and the highlights a bit, define the earpink and then blur it, and possibly make the gray more darker. :3 <span style="">08:36, 19, 07, 2012

I might not be able to work on this for a little, as I'm having trouble with my internet connection. I still want to do this, but it will be hard for a little. Just saying. 16:03, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little bigger. 22:49, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 17:45, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (Ki) - CBA
Woohoo, first original art in ages. We decided that he would get a kit and apprentice charart. I don't think this image is actually too bad imo. :3 Comments? <span style="">08:43, 19, 07, 2012

Thin out the stripes on his right leg. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  12:07, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Alright, this is probably my personal favourite. 8D Although I can't match Skt's epicness. <span style="">02:04, 21, 07, 2012

Blur the earpink a tad. Lovely! <333 15:08, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thank you <3 <span style="">08:07, 23, 07, 2012

I'm in love with this image. CBA? 17:20, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (A) ~ Under Evaluation
My first original art; comments? <span style="">Jul 19, 2012; 22:46pm 22:46, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Since this is your first image, the heading is Under Evaluation instead of For Approval. As you've gotten the basics down, but it doesn't quite make it to 80%, you have the one week to get it up to 80%. Lighten the shading on the paws, and smudge the brown so it looks more like the warrior.

Lighten the base colour and define the shading. 23:02, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. (And thank you Skye for helping me with the heading thing, I didn't know)<span style="">Jul 19, 2012; 23:18pm 23:18, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink like the other images, blur the shading, and smudge the brown vertically with a smaller brush. 23:42 Thu Jul 19

The black should have textre xP (unless I'm blind) <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor  03:59, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes. 13:06, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

The black is textured. I'd reccomend using a size 1 brush to smudge the brown and black. Define the shading a little more. Nice job 18:20, July 20, 2012 (UTC)

If there is texture then define it. Define the overall texture of the fur, and the smudging of the fur - it doesn't match his other images. 12:42, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (A) - For Approval
This is my first charart and it's for Robinwing. I hope I'm doing this right. So, comments? Viridiplantae 17:21, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Ohmywow, this is beautiful! A kit can make stripes and this warrior can't, I fail   Make the shading go all the way to the lineart on the hind quarters. Also, smudge the pelt into the earpink please. Blur and/or smudge the chest into the fur more too. <span style="">17:49 Sun Jul 22

Thicken the stripes a liiiittle more to match the warrior. This is stunning, I love it! Great job ^^ 20:37, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Also... can you blur where the dark brown meets the light underside? 20:38, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, wow. This is your first? This is very good! Blur his earpink a bit more. 22:41, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Wow <333 Blur the shading a bit. 22:47, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit. Love it. 23:40, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is about 80%. Should we put it "For Approval"? 23:41, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

I say yes. They've shown they know how to use shading and there's no waste or anything, and it matches well. I think it's better than mine 8D   23:45, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Also, I believe you're now an apprentice. 23:49, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (Ki) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Fails because she can never match Skt's awesomeness Comments? 22:35, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

And I'd rather not change the colors because I got them from the leader's .xcf. 22:40, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading. 22:42, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the patches under his chin? Also, I don't know if it's just my screen, but, on the two patches under his chin, it looks like the patches have white dots in them. 22:43, July 22, 2012 (UTC)

I can see them too, a couple little lighter spots. Is it possible to thicken the brown bits a tad? 12:07, July 23, 2012 (UTC)