Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Lichenfur (E) ~ Tweaked
Needed an under bite =3 Comments? 12:59, May 28, 2012 (UTC) Forgot to fix the jaw.. I'll fix that soon. 15:06, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe give the tooth some shading (for lack of a better word) by darkening the two bottom pixels on the tooth? ^^;; 15:36, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

That's not really an underbite. Her lower jaw should be sticking out, like her loner. 00:10, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know, that's why I said I would fix the jaw up there o3o I failed Dx  21:39, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Her chin looks a little flat, could you curve it? 23:06, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Move the tooth forward. Cuspids aren't that far back in the mouth. Breeze whisker  01:49, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the leg shading a little bit. 23:12, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Curved the chin and moved the tooth forward a bit. Blurred the shading on the leg a bit, but was it the right leg? 14:22, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

The mouth line looks kinda flat. Can you curve the lower lip up so that it goes over the original mouth? 16:26 Sat Jun 2

Reuploaded Kind of confused on what you were asking me to do, but tried my best. >.<  21:00, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Barley (Ki) - Redone
See the tweak nomination page for reasons caaaause.... I'm lazy. XD OA was Mistystar. All colors are from his loner (I have the layers still) so no changing that. Comments? 14:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and erase some from his face. Breeze whisker  16:05, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:25, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the white is too dark and all the shading needs blurred more  16:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading a bit. Skt Like a baws  09:48, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading too. (Chest meaning the part above the legs. XD 20:58, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

I am, but the computer with the file has extremely limited internet. I'm trying to catch it at a good moment to reupload, but I'm not sure how long that will take. I am working on it though. 20:07, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be darker. OA was Shaf Girl with a tweak by Cloudy, then another by Leaf-storm. Needed to be darker. Comments? 11:04, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him up a bit. Skt Like a baws  12:34, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make his earpink match the elder's more and make it bigger. 19:39, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:28, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 13:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:49, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad. Skt Like a baws  13:28, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Snaketooth (W) - Redone
Sorry for not putting this up earlier! Original artist was Mousetalon, and the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 20:05, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oh gawd this is wonderful. <3 Define the shading. *steals* ;3 05:03, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ;). 17:28, June 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * O Georgious. Define the shading a bit more and possibly the earpink. 09:54, 04, 06, 2012

Cloudpelt (D) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading, as it was blotchy. OA was Bramble and a tweak by Leaf-storm. Comments? 07:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:14, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to remove the shading at the base of the tail and put some more on the end? It doesn't really make sense to me. Skt Like a baws  22:41, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded :3 07:13, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his lower back, Looks good! -- 04:16, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Rain That Rattles on Stones (E) - Redone
OA was Nightfall101. He had some shading and pattern issues, and he also needed a missing eye, like his description denotes. Also, just for you guys, this has all new shading <3 (it's more like I couldn't find any of my past chararts that was a short haired elder) I tried out some ghost markings on him, but they're a little dark to be ghost now that I look at them XD  14:47, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Fantastic! He looks a little mottled right now though, maybe make the stripes (?) on his body lighter/less visible. 15:15, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

-headdesk- Just ignore me. I didn't even look at his description... He looks great! ^^; 15:19, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

It's so beautiful I love him <333333 Can you maybe define the earpink a little more and blur the white muzzle a tiny bit? 15:50 Sat Jun 2

Tis is beautiful<33 Can you darken the mottles a tiny bit? 15:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmmm...maybe darken the shading a tad and blur it? 8D Skt Like a baws  22:39, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten some shading on his chest? Breeze whisker  03:21, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe you should remove the pupil from his missing eye? That way it'll actually look missing x3. 23:48, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

...erm...pupil? That's depth of the eye socket. 00:38, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Added the underbite. OA was Stone. Comments? 18:20 Sat Jun 2

There's waste between the tail and hind leg. o3o 02:49, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Ki) - tweak
- because the muzzle is darker and looks gray rather than lighter ginger. 00:32, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around his head. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:34, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten his chest, too. 09:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a bit to match the other images? 13:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Should it be blurred more, the stripes will disappear. 14:25, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink on our right a bit. 18:28, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (W) - Redone
It was redone because it wasn't an actual dappled tortoiseshell. Comments? 16:27, June 3, 2012 (U

Define the yellow parts more so it matches the elder. 18:11, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the other parts as well, and smudge the patches more to match the elder. 99.111.198.23 18:51, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, that was me. >.<  18:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, and enlarge and blur the earpink~ Skt Like a baws  21:20, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

If you'd like, I can give you a color palette of what I used for the elder. Breeze whisker  00:46, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) - Tweaked
Shading needed defininging. owo OA was Scarlet owo. 19:44, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad?

Define the highlights; she looks like she just got darker. 01:21, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Ki) - Redone
OA was Mistystar and he needed to match. This is so baaaaad D: 20:06, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Where is his underbite tooth thingy? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:08, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the leg shading a bit and define the tailshading. Skt Like a baws  23:56, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Maple, do you know how little pixels there is on a kit blank? It's impossible to fit that. 01:20, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Really? File:Crookedstar.kit.alt.png You could zoom in on that and use it for a guide. 01:41, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

That's a broken jaw. Ice has an underbite. Do you know how small kits' teeth are? You would not be able to see it jutting out unless there was something wrong with their jaw. 01:43, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (A) - Redone
OA was Wildy, she needed to be actually dappled. I'm sorry Icefrost (I think?), I know this doesn't match the warrior but this was difficult enough as it was to do :S Breeze sent me the direct colors so they're directly off her elder. I wouldn't be surprised if I need to fix a lot of stuff tbh  01:40, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw (KP) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to have a gray muzzle. 22:01, June 4, 2012 (UTC)