Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Hawkfoot (Q) ~ Tweaked
15:36, February 11, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten her up; she looks more neutral brown than light brown. 20:14, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Sunfish (Q) ~ Tweaked


Would you shoot me if I asked you to give a bit of shape to the shading? I'm sorta losing exactly where this source is.

Reuploaded

Sunfish (W) ~ Tweaked
17:03, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

remove the eyelashes 17:12, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 18:17, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the legs? I think with this source, there'd be at least a little light there.

Reups 20:45, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Expand it a bit more?

Reups 21:07, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) ~ Tweaked
Didn't forget the eyelashes this time. *pats self on back* 20:49, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the lighter areas; the image looks like it's almost all in shading.

Reups Glad you agree because I was thinking the same thing 21:07, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (W) ~ Redone
Comments? 21:45, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think he can have the pale parts unless he was described with them?

If that's so, then Oakstar and others will have to be tweaked. 21:50, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Hmmm, I'd say wait on that then. I'm probably mistaken? Idk anymore, we keep changing things so often that it's hard to keep track.

The shading's leaking away from the lineart along the --> back, near the tail.

Actually, that's some of the paler parts, not leaking shading. 22:41, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

tbh i think the paler parts are fine there isnt anything that says hes purely solid brown, and if u want to get cheap u can always say its light brown, just.....a lighter light brown lul 22:45, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Robinwing (SC) (A) ~ Redone
Comments? 21:45, February 12, 2017 (UTC)

Same as warrior. Not entirely sure, but I'm thinking the pale parts will need to go.

Flamenose (Star) - Redone
I'll fix the neon look in a little bit. Just wanted to get this posted before I make dinner. OA was myself, redone for various reasons. 23:44 Sun Feb 12

Reuploaded Making "bright red" charart is kind of difficult without making it orange or neon. 00:27 Mon Feb 13

Reuploaded Ugh. So I think I finally decided on his base. Now he's the same color as Redtail's alt StarClan, pulled from the file. I'm so sorry for how many times I have had to repost this...these colors are a nightmare to get right. 01:21 Mon Feb 13

Brokenstar (DF) - Tweaked
OA was Burnt. Tweaked for long fur. 00:50 Mon Feb 13