Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Owlfur (W) ~ Redone
Here's Owlfur, and let me say I'm not very proud of it. OAs are Snowfeather1 and Dawnleaf. 11:59, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  12:12, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face, shoulders, and tail. 14:30 Thu Mar 1

Make the earpink a tad lighter. Sunny frost  21:30, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudged bits a tad. Sky It's a bunny. Not Nidorino. 23:21, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reason for redo? (we still do that right?) 21:28, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink looked bad, his highlights were too thick, the shading needed to be blurred, and his white needed to appear more offwhite. (Will upload this soon.) 21:38, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste in between the legs. That, or it's me munted eyes. :P Sky Molto bene 14:03, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out and blur the chest, paws, and tail tip feathering; it looked a bit choppy 23:42, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste, Trolly. ^^; Also, blur the ear pink. 03:05, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add the slightest tad more opacity to the shading. *thought Cloudy was Sky e3e* 08:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, yea, blur the shading, too. Forgot to mention that up ^^^there. Dazzle did what now? =P  09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge that hard edged bit off to the right on the white on the tail? How did you mistake her for my awesomeness? xD Sky Molto bene 12:21, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 09:00, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't worked on it. It will be up later. 11:09, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded This would have been up earlier today, but I woke up and 3:30 AM and I haven't gone to sleep since >_>. (It's 4:42 PM now, so.. xD.) 20:42, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the white? 01:47, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I'll blur it a bit, since if I blur it too much it will look really bad, and if I don't blur it, people will say I need to. (Waiting for a few more comments before editing.) 10:46, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head a bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  00:27, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E)- Tweaked
Tweak patched cause they were too neon. OA=Ashshadow 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink match the patches' colour? Or do the other way around... 03:06, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - sorry it look a while, Im using my parent's laptop and I'm getting confused with all the files 04:01, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

The patchy fur is awfully bright. Hurts mah eyes Dx Tone it down a bit? 08:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

No offence to you or the OA, but this image is just.... Eugh. Any chance of you redoing? 05:18, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I second that. Again, no offense, but you'd be better off redoing it :S  05:07, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (D) - Tweaked
There are so many changes to this file, it's hard to keep track.. But the first OA was Sandy, with the most recent redo by Iceheart. He needed a floofy tail. 17:51, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the tail pweeze. Maybe make it a bit pineconey, kinda like Squirrelflight's? 23:55, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Or, if you want him to have a bottlebrush tail, go nuts with it. Yeah, that's a ferret's tail, but it's the first pic I found of a nutso bottlebrush tail. 00:14, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add more 'floof' to the bottom where it's straight, kinda like the warrior? 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dat floof >:C 20:28, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the tail lineart some more. 21:08, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

See my comment on the warrior. I can't; there simply aren't enough pixels to fit all that 21:43, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's two black pixels inside the tail. 18:55, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, technically there's three black pixels, but same thing xD Can you possibly just add one more layer of pixels to the fluffy tail? (sorry if you can't, but it just looks so thin...) 14:05, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (W) - Tweaked
Fluffff <3 OA was Insane with a redo by Iceheart. 18:20, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the bushy-ness more even at the top of the tail, it kind of dips. 21:59, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

And make the lines on the tail thicker. 23:57, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't make the lines on the tail thicker or it won't look the same. Trust me. The same applies for the deputy. 20:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it a bit.... crazier to match the deputy? XD And there's like two random black pixels inside the tail near the base. 07:24, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudberry (Q) - Redone
Redone to match warrior image. OA was Echomist with (minor) tweaks by Bramble and Ivy. 00:56, 11, 03, 2012

Blur the flank shading and enlarge the earpink a tad. 00:58 Sun Mar 11

Blur the tail shadin~ Sky Molto bene  02:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad more desturated? 06:11, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  01:19, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the belly shading just a tad. 19:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  06:19, 15, 03, 2012

Rubblepaw (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Moonleaf, and needed to be darkened, for he's actually black. =3 I'm not changing anything except the darkness of the pelt. Comments? 17:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter parts to make them more distinct :3 This is adorable~ 07:53, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean...? I just tweaked the image by brushing the burn tool over it, and I'm only changing that, as I've said above.^^ 19:03, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, I fail; I meant the hind leg shading, not lighter part >.< *goes to hide in a corner* 08:47, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:44, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should change the eye colour, black cats very rarely actually have blue eyes. 19:39, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - Redone
The patches were over-blurred in some places and shading was some-what blotchy. OA's were Sandstar, Bloo, and Leaf-storm. 19:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, you're fine. 8D Just lighten and blur the earpink. 21:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  22:23, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:24, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I dont think the changes are showing... 22:33, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the chest a tad. :3 23:00, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Move the highlight of the eye to match the light source and maybe make the tail tip a bit wavier? It looks kinda funny since it's just straight, but that's just my opinion. 23:59, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visable/define it. 01:14, 12, 03, 2012

Blur the shading/highlight/lighter spot on his shoulder --  Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the gray into the white? He's long-furred, so I think it oughta look furry. :3 03:11, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since smudging is optional and other images would have to be tweaked it if was smudged, I think it should stay as is. Could you whiten the white a little though? 06:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink, and make it more triangular. it's awfully hard to see.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:12, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 23:25, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? And, make the white more white and less gray :3 09:25, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can fix the ear pink, but the white is as white as I can possibly get it. :/ I'll be reuploading sometime tomorrow or Saturday. 23:14, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Shredtail (W) - Redone
OA was Night Shine with a tweak by me. The fur on the tail look all choppy, the scars looked paint brushed on, and he was a modified triangle tabby. I hate to have to redo one of Night Shine's fantastic chararts, but for the sake of realism... Comments? 23:37, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

P.S. I forgot to add ragged fur, I'll do that when I reupload. 23:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't the tail tip be rounded a bit? To quote myself on chat: "Holy sh**." 23:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Haha luff ya, Cloudy! :) 23:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the lineart on the naked part of his tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 02:40, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The scars on his tail look off. They go onto parts of his tail that would be fur, not skin. To fix this, either add bare patches where you know the tail would be, or remove the scars in their entirety. Also, can you take the smudge tool and make the scars taper in a more natural fashion? 02:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

You don't have to, but I think that you could add a furry tone to the stripes :3 *steals* 08:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone
Redone to match his warrior image. Why yes, that is a paw on the collar. Why? Because I take it to the next level. Comments? 02:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink? The paw is a neat little touch. <3 Sky Molto bene 02:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

The white on the tail looks pure white. Even if it is not, could you add a little shading to the furry part on the bottom? 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

As much as I love the adorable little white paw on it, his collar needs to be removed. He was shown without one, and as far as I know, was never mentioned with one. I don't see anything else wrong though, lovely job. <3 05:42, March 12, 2012 (UTC)


 * I'd really rather keep the collar. It's possible he did what Cody did: slipped out of his collar whenever he went out. 05:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

And put it on again everytime he went back? I seriously doubt that. I'm sorry, but since we have proof he wasn't wearing a collar, I really do think it should be removed. Did it ever mention him with a collar anywhere? If not, it should be removed. Not all kittypets have to wear collars.... 06:19, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

He was never specifically mentioned without one at his house, either. And yes, cats can put collars back on. I've seen it myself. I'm keeping it. 06:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

We have no proof of that though. However, we have proof of him not wearing a collar every single time we've seen him. Remove it please. 06:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, he was shown without it in both the graphic novel in the back of SD, as well as the SkyClan set...and in SD, he was shown coming right from his twoleg nest. Wouldn't that count for something? 06:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Personally I think all kittypets should have collars even if they weren't shown with one on. It shows rank, not all bloodclan cats had teeth and claws yet they are shown with them. So I think the collar should be left on. 16:12, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also lighten the shading. 17:15, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Since when did all BloodClan cats get collars and claws added to them? They never did, only if they're shown. There's very few BloodClan cats who have images with collars. And why should kittypets (not saying specifically Billystorm, just responding to wildfire) have collars if they are shown without them? That makes no sense. The blank shows the rank just fine without a collar. 17:32, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

(sigh) Fine. Removed it. Re-uploaded. 18:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

In the guidelines it says, "All BloodClan cats are depicted with modified rogue blanks, with toothed collars and dog's teeth sheathed on their claws." So they all should have collars. Also he should have one on warrior image to show he's a daylight warrior. 18:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Wildfire, this isn't the place to be having this conversation. Take it elsewhere. 18:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome Billystorm is awesome~<3 Blur the highlight/nonshaded part on his shoulder, and make that---> side of his neck curve inward a bit like a this> ( 19:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be my moniter, but he looks too brown, make him more ginger-y.  ❄  Sunny  frost  ❄    23:14, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

It's the shading, Sunny. He's ginger. 23:15, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:49, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

HE's actually more ginger than his warrior. XD It's fine. But can you blur the earpink and define it (in color)? 03:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

If I blue it more it mostly becomes a weird looking blob, and the color matches the warrior. However, if anyone else wants me to, I'll change the color. 06:04, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Just blur it the tiniest bit? On a very low setting. It looks very hard edged right now.... I know what a pain getting it not to overblur is though. x.x 09:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (KP) ~ Redone
Tonka!! <33 My kitty I love her so much 8DD OA was Nightfall with a twaek by Twi. Comments? 23:19 Mon Mar 12

Gaaah I forgot the stripes are supposed to be thin D8 *fixing that* 23:25 Mon Mar 12

Make her paws more white and less creamish. 23:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:55 Mon Mar 12

I don't have any of the Ravenpaw's Path manga so I can't check, but was she shown with a collar? 05:19, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know. Maybe she got a collar from her owners. 05:31 Tue Mar 13

I think the collar can stay. Make the paws a bit more white. Awesome as always, Mounty <3 08:26, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8DD 20:52 Tue Mar 13

Kittypet gets a collar. I just checked. You're all good, Mountain. 00:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Her left (our right) ear looks kinda... empty. Can you add a stripe or two to it? And the highlight on her left (our right) eye is hard to see. 23:29, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Mintfur (RC) (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar and was tweaked by Leafstrike. Comments? 23:47 Tue Mar 13

Blur dat earpink a tad. Finally realised he's s tom? *innocent face* Sky Exterminate! 00:11, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shut it >.< 00:17 Wed Mar 14

He's originaly a gray tabby, and he looks like a silver tabby right now...so...I suggest lightening the stripes a tad or darkening the main pelt color, and also, try having the opacity of the white chest a tad lower. <333 05:21, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:28 Wed Mar 14

Blur those stripes a tiny bit? xD That gray part on his eye makes him look female. <3 08:38, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Message from Mounty since she can's get on currently: The stripes look fine. 23:22, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (E) - Tweaked
I just tweaked the muzzle....OA was Thistle (who had help from 'teldy.) Comments? 01:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The line should end at the edge of her mouth and should not extend below it. 01:49, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ice (Alt Lo) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike, he needed an underbite. I'm not sure if I should make his teeth longer or not or to define his jaw line some. That's what you critiquers are for :P Because something just doesn't look right. 02:43, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the chin lineart. 05:18, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also, it's your choice, but maybe make the white part of the eye smaller. 15:34, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice, Wild. 06:20, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the ears. 10:47, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe sharpen the teeth? 12:42, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

@Cloudy I know read the 2nd-4th words. Make the chin more rounded 15:59, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart (A) - Tweaked
Tweaked the stripes to make them darker, so they could match the warrior/kit image. OA= Bramble, redone with the new blanks by me. Comments? 06:18, 15, 03, 2012

Pinefur (W) - Redone
Totally forgot to check if the nomination was approved.... XD I had so much fun with this it's ridiculous. <3 Anyways, stripes were unrealistic, and in my opinion shading was eh, but others might have disagreed. I'm so glad I can finally redo this. XD OA was Sandstar with a redo by me. Comments? 15:56, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading? Wonderful, Paleh! 21:13, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. *Steals kitty and pats* Sky Exterminate! 00:13, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Redclaw (W) - Redone
OA was Leafstrike, and the stripes looked painted on. No offense, Leaf. =/ 19:28, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

I wouldn't take offense, that was quite old anyways, from my whiny days. Define the earpink. 19:42, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:53, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Ki) - Tweaked
Needed lighter paws xP OA was Sparrowsong with a redo and tweak by Mistystar and a redo from Stoneclaw. 19:36, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Seville (KP) ~ Redone
Woo, the paw print is back~ Comments? 03:59, March 16, 2012 (UTC)