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Morningflower (A) - Approved
Morningflower as an apprentice; not very happy about the way she came out...anyways comments? Ðαωηlεαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 02:11, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

It looks very good! I suggest adding more brown patches. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:20, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Added more patches. Ðαωηlεαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 03:21, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches more--  Night s h i n e    ~  03:27, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred it.Ðαωηlεαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 05:23, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. Darken the shading, I cannot see it very well. ♥Ice shine★  15:02, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading. Ðαωηlεαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 19:14, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Center the ear pink a little. Cherryfur123 Home + work should never be together! 21:06, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks! Fixed the ear pink.Anything else? Ðαώήlέαf "I had a dream, and in it somthing eats you!." 21:33, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add some patches to the tail. ♥Ice shine★  12:22, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Added patches to the tail.  Dawny  19:54, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's looking good, Dawnleaf! Just add some of those yellowish colored spots that her other images have to make it look more like them. ;) Cherryfur123 Home + work should never be together! 22:29, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty! Do what Cherryfur said about the tan splotches, but also work on earpink; it looks like one of the brown smudges to me. Could you make it more of a pale pink, bigger, and more blurred? Holly dapple  04:54, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Urh... This looks good, but I already reserved it. I couldn't work on it because of my exams, but Insane said that it was ok.... I'm confused and a little bit annoyed. ωiſdɦɛɑrŧ 05:29, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wildheart: You should have posted something here so we would all know. We would've given you a bit more time. As for the image it's very good. Just do what Cherryfur and Hollydapple said. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  17:52, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this image, Wildheart, if you would still like to you can take over. Dawny  19:56, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnleaf: Aw, no! You don't have to do that! Yours is way better than mine is, anyways. Keep on working on it, and next time something like this happens, I'll just post something up here about being delayed.

Ashshadow: Insane told me to put a note in the table where I reserved Morningflower's apprentice pic, and I did so, but apparently somebody deleted it. I'll post something here next time. Hopefully there WILL be no next time :P ωiſdɦɛɑrŧ 23:01, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

I did see that note about the time I was looking for a cat to (before Hawkheart). As an extra suggestion on improving the image, Dawnleaf, the shoulder highlight is a little too low. Make it a little higher. Three cheers for the red, white, and blue!  23:21, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, I don't want to do her anymore, someone else can take over, from where I left off. Dawny  01:57, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

If i cant do Ivytails (Alt) version i will do this (wait how do i edit it i save it and put it on my pixlr right? oh well i will learn.)  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 13:44, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh NVM if its ok with everyone can i do this  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 22:56, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Wildheart's doing it. (?) ♥Ice  shine★  22:58, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thats wierd its crossed out like this

Wildheart Morningflower (A)

thats what it says  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 23:06, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw is right, I checked. Why is does it have a strike-through through it? Has Wildheart decided to not do Morningflower? I'm confused. The same thing happened before, didn't it? I can't remember...I'm a little sleepy, and my cat (Gertie) is trying to get my attention by biting my foot and being the cutest darn thing. Holly dapple  03:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can we decide whether anyone is going to do this as I am confused as to whether to archive this as withdrawn or not -- Sandy star 18:01, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, I'll finish it. No sense letting a nice image go to waste over literally nothing. I'll tweak it a bit and put it back up. I seem to attract Morningflower images. =D -- 01:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you Bramble; and yes you do XD (Not to mention I failed in my goal to do all her images - I got bored lol). The main issue with this I think is consistency with her exisiting images; just the colours used are not quite the same. [I'd also like to note that the past tense of 'withdraw' is 'withdrawn' rather than 'withdrawed' for whoever wrote that - it's not important who] 11:59, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Aw i wanted to do her...Oh well may i suggest making the earpink a tad bit bigger?  Sandle  GregxSara forever 18:42, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

The original image was lovely in its way, but it bore no semblance to its counterparts. So I completely redid it, and it now most closely resembles the elder image, as the cat is facing the same way in the elder and apprentice images. The ear pink has also been made larger. I apologize for how long this took.. -- 04:32, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit bigger. 22:15, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger and more visible 15:09, August 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * Does it really need to be bigger on a black cat? 08:57, August 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Try to make the ear pink bigger, and maybe less blurry. Other than that, it looks AWESOME! ♥Featherblaze♥  Meow to me!  23:07, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 20:58, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the ear pink jkust fine, but I agree it should be a tad bigger. Not much, just a tad. 23:16, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. By defined I meant make it more shaped. 00:26, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. -- 02:42, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks pale. 22:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

They're the same colour as the ones on Morningflower's other images. 23:06, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I checked the other ones and they were more amberish? :P 02:53, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the brown spots on the tail lighter. 19:21, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sigh. Over-riding and approving. 05:54, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Tinycloud (W) - Approved
1 Word: Fail. Comments? 21:52, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

It looks very flat right now. Try darkening the shading in some spots to make it have more texture-- n i g h t  s h i n e  21:53, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should thin the shading some aswell. 21:58, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading or the highlights more...depending how you would take that in. Hehe. 23:23, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger, lighten the shading. 02:59, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely. Blur the shading, as Frostheart said. 21:39, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Ok, I fixed it all up, any better? 07:44, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a little bit more. -- Sky dragon Flight of dreams... 19:45, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Nice picture but blur the shading a little more--the colors look a little seperate. Willowheart1231 22:50, August 19, 2010(UTC)Wllowheart1231

They look very different. Just lighten the shading and blur it. 20:43, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it's my computer, but there's like a...stripe? of highlights on her chest. Just blur the as much as you can. Also, blur the shading.....Good though, Dawny! :D

Yes, blur the shading some more and the ear pink. 14:58, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I apologize for taking so long, school has really taken its toll. :\ Anyways, I blurred the shading and ear pink. Thanks Tawny. 20:06, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Could you really blurr the highlight on the back? Other then that it looks pretty good! ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:35, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind the above, it just needs on the hind leg ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀' GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:47, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading. -- 22:14, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Try making the shading lighter. 22:49, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Darken it a bit near the left edge around the chest and forearm. Darken the tail shading-- 01:20, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading. -- 05:17, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tiny bit bigger and darken the tail shading more-- 17:31, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit bigger and add shading to the tail. 01:37, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Made the ear pink bigger and darkend the shading on the tail. Frostheart, if someones already pointed out somthing that needs to be changed, you don't have to repeat it. :) -- 05:41, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Oh..sorry. Didn't read Nightshine's comment. :P 15:58, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading under the left forearm. 20:12, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading. -- 20:28, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a little bit bigger. 21:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Made ear pink bigger. -- 23:53, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. 05:54, August 30, 2010 (UTC)