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Softpaw blanks- For Approval
Alright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.)

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D  22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... http://images.wikia.com/warriors/images/archive/2/2f/20120923200241!Shellyheart.png 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫  17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me.

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinx the power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.  Charlie  Let's   go to   Candy Mountain  02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

I couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows  call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/5/56/Giratina_orig.gif Crystals   over   Sparks  http://images.wikia.com/pokemon/images/2/27/Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. -- Đark ɦallows  06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? 20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on these? 00:44, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I am, I've just been having complications with it. My sincerest apologies :(  01:04, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front paws are still a bit too big, can you shrink them a bit? 19:37, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bump the closest eye up higher and smooth out the back. 20:32, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front left (my left) paw should be facing the front a bit more. It's on quite an awkward angle.  Millie  It's   all   black magic!  02:07, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The face looks...How do I put this? Flat-ishPikachushinx the power of the past 14:58, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, the face is fine. With the pose that it is in, the head would be angled that way, making the face appear that it looks kind of 'flattish'. 01:20, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Frogtail (A) ~ For Approval
Here's Frogpaw. I kinda messed this one up x.x Comments?

♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  12:17, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

This should be named File:Frogtail.apprentice.png 12:36, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

-derp- It won't let me x.x Could someone help? Sorry... ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  16:17, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink  18:32, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Renamed. 21:57, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on the shoulder. 01:59, 10, 10, 2012

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:19, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks kinda purple, and maybe you could define it?Pikachushinx the power of the past 12:29, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:49, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Still looks purple, and now it needs more blurring.Pikachushinx the power of the past 00:52, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:15, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink upwards, and also make it a pale red colour. 10:19 Thu Oct 11

I'm really sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. Every time I blur the shading, it goes square or purple. Withdrawing. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:39, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over? 02:49, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Okay I tried to match Roo's awesomeness. o3o 16:11, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the texture, and maybe make it thinner? =3 23:48, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Bah, I tried. 00:56, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more. =) 20:02, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like he has silver slashes. Lighten the opacity of them and thin them out a bit. 21:21, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blech, I started over. 01:11, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him. He looks too dark.

Smudge the earpink some more. 12:46, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 19:24, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be my computer, but I think I see waste near his head and haunch. 00:44, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 23:23, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Ashheart (W) ~ For Approval
Ashheart as a warrior. I don't think she looks too bad, especially since it was done on pixlr (stupid school computers won't let me download gimp). Comments? 14:20, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blend out the shoulder shading more, define the earpink, and make it a tad less blurry 16:08, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing. 16:51, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Earpink looks purple. Is earpink supposed to look purple? If it is, tell me, but as far as I know, needs fixing.Pikachushinx the power of the past 16:52, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if canges are showing. 17:01, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  20:16, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shading's fine, Feather. Earpink still looks purpley, but the changes do show.Pikachushinx the power of the past 21:10, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

No. The shading needs to be blurred.

Reuploaded 18:06, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading and darken the earpink. 18:55, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add more depth to the shading? It looks flat right now. 19:35, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink so that it's more in the ear? 22:11, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:16, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, and more in the ear. Also, define and blur the shading. =3 12:39, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, and define the haunch shading too. Looking good. 08:34, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:41, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch highlight, if there is one.

Rowanberry (Q) ~ For Approval
Her name, her description, mary-sue, in a good way <3



Comments?

♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:29, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller, and blur it 19:43, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

e.e I tried, stupid pixlr makes every bit of shading a hard time. When I blur it, it squares, when I change the size, it overlaps the sides. Ah, well, re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  19:51, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her face, please. =3 01:54, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I love the pattern, but it's unrealistic in the means that the design isn't formatted to the actual pelt of a cat. The pelt doesn't match up by bit and piece when the cat strikes a certain pose. All you need to do is shift a few pieces of the design like the legs, tail, and a tiny bit on the chest. Feel free to disagree though. 04:32, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, Teldy, but I'm inclined to disagree with this. I know a friend who had a cat with a similar pelt to this, and I think it is a possible pelt pattern, even though maybe slightly abnormal. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪♫ вαʐïṉģα  10:14, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

What Teldy is talking about is that the pelt moves too perfectly. On the back legs, the pattern needs to be raised up. On the front legs, it need to be brought down, so that it looks more natural. Now the pattern looks like it just goes straight across; which is unnatural. 10:19 Fri Oct 12

Re-uploaded I changed the pelt style to make it more realistic :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    12:52, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The cream seems kinda pinkish. Was that intentional?

Yeah, the other cream colour I used didn't blend well, so I tried this one, and it looked slightly better. Also, I think if light catches it, it will reveal more creamy :3 ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    16:17, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I think you'll need to change it. It looks skin-colored, and makes it seem like Rowanberry doesn't have cream and brown, but brown streaks of fur.

For a brown and cream cat, I was thinking something like either Molepaw or Ivystripe without the stripes (the forelegs and underbelly) or like a tortoiseshell. 16:33, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    17:30, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

She looks mottled, if you use pixlr, it's probably because of the blur tool, instead of using the blur tool, I'd suggest using the Gaussian Blur tool at a rate of ten. Also, the shading looks a bit hard-edged on her tail. By the way, this is beautiful. =D =3  22:02, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink 01:11, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the brown slightly darker because it looked a bit golden. ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    08:08, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and fix the eyes and the earpink. 08:12 Sat Oct 13

The front leg closest to us, still looks mottled. 23:46, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can't see it mottled :s ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:11, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it. It's near the elbow. 21:17, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern still looks like it's been pasted on. It should curve and go with the body. o3o 00:11, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks kinda gray on the cream. Maybe try and shade with dark brown instead of black 03:19, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shadig still looks hard-edged on her tail, can you blur it? x3 12:15, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ♪ ♫ Feat her ♪   ♫  вαʐïṉģα    10:17, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, it looks a little bit paint-brushed on, still. <span style="">10:18 Thu Oct 18

Rowanberry (A) ~ For Approval
Wow, I haven't put an image up over here in a long time... o3o Well, here is Rowanberry. Hopefully I copied the pattern right c; 20:26, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the markings a little. c: 20:43, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Least she's got a description now....Define the shading. 22:36, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope the shading looks okay x.x I was trying to match the way it looked like on her Queen image... 01:53, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Like I said on the queen image, the pattern matches with the lineart too perfectly. When striking a certain pose, the entire pelt doesn't all of a sudden match. So likewise, shift a few things and you should be perfectly fine. 04:32, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Should these colors match the queen? 21:44, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I will redo this to match the queen since Feather changed it, but right now I am waiting for the xcf. file ^^ 00:54, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:00, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Oh, and Misty can I borrow the .xcf for this? My email is rowan.lbishop@gmail.com 18:15, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully I blurred it enough. If I did it too much, it would end up looking weird... >.< 21:57, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Misty, I ///love/// this image. CBA? 21:40, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

This can't be approved, lovely as it is, because the pattern still matches perfectly on her hind leg. Like Teldy said, the entire pelt shouldn't line up exactly because she happens to be crouching. Fix it please. 01:05, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm kind of bad at these kinds of things... Can you tell me how it needs to be moved? 02:20, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

On the shoulder, shift the pattern, up or down, your choice, and maybe to the side. Then, on the top of the hindleg, shift or turn the pattern down. Something along those lines I'd say. 02:46, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded x.x  21:20, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Mintkit (YS) (Ki) ~ CBA
I'm not rejoining... I swear. I'm just really bored. And I like Yellowfang's siblings. 22:14, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him and the shading; he's never called dark grey, just grey. 01:55, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Dark gray IS gray. Shelly may just be going ton personal preference, and Skye did the same for Larkpaw, did she not? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:33, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

No no, it's fine. I lightened him, despite the fact that plenty of chararts made for characters with non-specific coloring have shades that vary from the base color and I was simply basing his color off of his sister. 04:56, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading. He seems kinda flat.

Can you define the earpink on his left side? 18:18, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. You guys asked for it, I suppose. I shaded him like I would shade the rest of the things I draw. Also, as many of you know, I'm moving tonight. I might be offline for a couple days while I'm getting everything set up. 18:12, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 06:22, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Poolcloud (W) ~ Under Evaluation
Alright. I am not good with chararts yet, but here is Poolcloud. I tried to make her as similar as her queen image but it wasn't easy. If this is approved, may I be moved up to the apprentice section? Here she is.

Any comments? 08:58, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Very nice, Shim! But this needs to match more, and the shading could use defining on the tail and the body above the back leg. It's beautiful!<3 <span style="">09:11 Fri Oct 12

Re-uploaded

You're supposed to upload over the image, not create a new file. ;) <span style="">09:28 Fri Oct 12

Alright, but I have no idea how to do that. -- 09:42, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

You go to the bottom of the page where the image you are re-uploaded is, then you click "Upload a new version of this image". :3 <span style="">09:44 Fri Oct 12

Since you're a kit, the heading has been changed to Under Evaluation. Fix the blurred lineart, the grey should all be one colour, add a pupil, and define the shading. 18:55, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the back haunch's shading. 21:11, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, blue it and darken it  21:37, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink not the whole ear? And "blue it" Shoon?-- 21:57, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Looks like it doesn't have any shading though... -- 23:08, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, brighten the ear-pink, and make the patches match more 01:03, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Patches: darken them just only a tad and dont use too big blur tool, or it will be looking blotchy like right now. 16:23, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Shush Boss x.x. And blur the earpink. 23:15, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shimmy  ~Call me wave ♥  23:30, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the gray, define the shading, blur the earpink, and make the pattern match more. =) 23:46, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can I please be moved up to the apprentice section? Isn't this at least 80%? Shimmy ~Call me wave ♥  00:20, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

If a lead thought it was above 80%, you would already be in the apprentices' section. Please just do what we're asking of you. 00:23, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm just in a really bad mood right now. Shimmy ~Call me wave ♥  00:32, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Poolcloud.warrior.png. 00:47, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Renamed. 00:49, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the patches, and darken and define the shading. 15:29, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Fix the blurred lineart. 15:51, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 20:13, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ear-pink is okay, just only make it more triangle. 16:55, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

No, Shinx is correct. The earpink needs to be blurred. Also, darken the shading.

Still working on this?

Foxheart (A) - For Approval
Hello, remember me? Its nice to be back, well I've done this small treasure Foxheart..but I surely need to start training in chararts agin..aww great old days. ,19:46,October 12,2012 (UTC)

Can you make the pattern match the deputy/warrior more? 21:55, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter too, pweeze 01:04, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, I need some help with those stripes. ,10:07,October 13,2012 (UTC)

Barkface (MCA) -for approval
lineart tweaks ftw <3333 comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:23, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

There is some waste around him ,16:21,October 13,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 16:46, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Is there shading on the far legs? It just looks lighter to me. 18:30, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

Try and curve the tail more naturally so he doesn't look like he has a broken tail. 00:45, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the pixels on the top that are solid black. 17:00, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add depth to the herbs? 18:08, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lessen the red tint in the shading a bit. =3 12:43, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Choo still working? 00:38, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanberry (W) ~ For Approval
I know this needs work, but I'm proud of her. :D Comments? 20:41, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:42, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the earpink. It looks like the tan bit on her ear. 22:38, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I'd rather not change the earpink because I got it from an .xcf, but if anyone else agrees I'll change it. 20:31, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be more visible. 00:24, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want me to define it some more? 20:07, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Wetfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
He's soooo cute 83. Also, I see the waste on his left side. After a lot of edits pixlr stops doing stuff. (Crazy I know, but I still love it x3.) Comments? 21:16, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail and maybe add some neck shading. 06:12, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ewww. 23:38, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Volepaw(SC) (A) ~ For Approval


......I'm so proud~ My first solid coloured cat that looks decent~ Anyway, comments, amici? Pad foot Mischief Managed 00:04, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job amico, blur the haunch shadings. ,12:27,October 16,2012 (UTC)

Reupload. Pad foot Mischief Managed 22:51, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm gonna be grounded for three weeks, so...if I don't work on this, that's why. If this is declined and someone wants it okay~ But if no one does I would still like this. Pad foot Mischief Managed 11:57, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (W) ~ CBA
Wee, the most unrealistic cat in the series has a warrior image. Do not tell me to lighten the shading, since I already know it's too dark. I'll reupload with the lighter shading in the morning. I suck with white cats. x.x

He has a darker tail tip? o.o Blur the shading. 06:08, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No, that was me getting my images mixed up.

Can you lighten the black a bit? Pad foot Mischief Managed 23:48, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Make the earpink bigger<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 13:34, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink's fine, honestly. I hate huge ear pink... it looks all blotchy and ugly.

I hate it too, but that's a little too small....<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 18:43, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's not. It's a perfectly acceptable size for ear pink.

CBA? 01:47, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) - For Approval
I was trying to imitate Princess's pattern, didn't exactly go as planned... 03:15, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. This is wonderful Scarlet. =D 12:11, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:06, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think she needs traces of grey on her muzzle, cause I think the book ended with her as a queen and she was mentioned with it as one. o3o -makes no sense- 13:17, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (W) - For Evaluation
My first PCA work. I tried to match the kit art... Comments? 17:52, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Dawn, this is /wonderful/ for your first PCA image. I'm very impressed.

Holy... O.O this is excellent. Define the earpink more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:26, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the texture a little and define the haunch shading. ^^ If you use GIMP, I can give you the xcf or if not, I can give you the exact colours I used. 22:39, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Improved?''' Thanks for the compliments. ^^ I do use GIMP, so that would be great help. (Although I probably should have asked from the beginning, heh...) 17:10, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

Foxheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
Foxheart <333 Again, I adore this pattern <33 Comments? <span style="">23:08, 17, 10, 2012

Runningnose (Ki) ~ For Approval
Runningkit. <3 Comments? 00:51, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww so cute! Blur the earpink on --->this side a little.<333 <span style="">08:10 Thu Oct 18

Re-uploadded. 10:10, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur (Ki) ~ For Approval
D'aww, lil Cinderkit. All colours from the deputy, from when I tweaked it. Comments? <span style="">05:31 Thu Oct 18

Darken the shading a wee bit. Lurvely. 10:11, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">03:38 Fri Oct 19

Featherstorm (W) - For Approval
Featherstorm, aka the cat that looked like Hickory until her queen image was redone! I quite like how this came out =) So...whatcha want me to change?  05:42, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hiiiiickory <33333 Hmm....can you possibly define /where/ the ear pink is in the ear? It blends in with the pelt and I can't really tell exactly where it stops and the rest of the pelt begins.

Cinderfur (A) ~ For Approval
Shadingg looks terrible...<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 11:36, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the earpink. Nice~ 18:50, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks. And commentary at last!<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 21:42, October 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earponk's leaked onto the back of the ear. 01:43, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Earponk, lol<span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Pikachushinx the power of the past 07:31, October 19, 2012 (UTC)