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Mousefur (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
She was shown to be a light brown in The Darkest Hour, so Comments? 13:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Lighten it up and blur t: 22:06 Mon Jun 18he shadin. Skt Like a baws  13:38, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color a bit more. 15:10, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

A lot more actually. This is in no way light, it's the same color as her main image. Also desaturate the earpink and thicken the shading on her neck/shoulder. 15:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png.

Reuploaded 20:24, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Nice, Moonshine<3 Blur the earpink and shading a bit and rename it File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png Just take away one .png. 20:29, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just a tip from an old coot. ;) I advise, with lighter cats, adding a second layer of shading where the shadows would be darkest, like at the base of her tail, back of her head, behind her front legs, etc. It gives the charart a more three-dimensional look and feel that might help out a bit. 20:37, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I changed the heading, since Mousefur already has an alt warrior. This is the second alt.

This should be called File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png. No need for the extra .png. Blur the earpink and shrink it. 00:01, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 06:20, 31, 05, 2012

Define the neck and haunch shading. 08:26, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" on the face and tail. 05:45 Sat Jun 2

Shrink the ear pink and make it more triangular.

Moon was having issues, so I uploaded for her. 18:11, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, blur it, and center it in the ear. 19:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:31, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, it's very sharp-edged. 22:27, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. 21:40, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Now they are ;) 22:28, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. It looks a little too close to the bottom of the ear.

Still working on this? Skt Spoilers... 22:32, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Rowan helped a lot. 19:55, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and there's some...darker color around the earpink. Also, make the earpink less...pink. 18:41, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:13, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think I'll CBA this since it's been sitting here for a little bit without a comment. 19:27, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but that ear pink still bothers me a bit. It needs to be blurred a bit more. Other than that, the rest of the image is fine. ^^; This next part is //totally optional//, but could you define the shading just a tad?

I think there's waste on the edge of the image. 19:36 Tue Jun 12

Reuploaded I blurred the earpink to the max. if I blur it anymore, it'll look weird. 20:04, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, make it more triangular, maybe that should help a little, I'm not going to tell you to blur it more. 20:08, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

There also still seems to be some darker color around the earpink; please fix that. 22:53, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the brown just slightly less golden, and get rid of the blurred lineart on the ear. 22:33, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this?

Yes, Reuploaded 01:51, June 17, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Can you lighten her up a bit, since this is ment to be light brown, it doesn't really seem like that to my eyes. 03:48, 17, 06, 2012

There's a few pixels of waste a bit in front of her chest. 09:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts? 14:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:31, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading some more and thicken it on the shoulder. 01:25, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the ear closer to us. owo 15:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:39, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mooon, I really love this.<3 CBA? 22:02, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Er sorry to interupt but can you make the haunch the same color as the shoulders? Try erasing some of the shading at the middle of the haunch and blurring it. 22:06 Mon Jun 18

Also blur the shoulder shading and define the earpink. 22:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Continuing CBA? 23:55, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make it less green and blur the shading all around more. 02:30, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, it looks like it's all in shadow 14:56, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:02, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can you extend the shading on the shoulders, and define it on the haunch?

Nightstar (E) - Under Evaluation
Comments? 00:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Enlarge the lighter area on the haunch, and blur the shading on the face a tiny bit. Lighten the shading a smidge, too, as I can barely see the lineart. 00:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I can't really tell the light source, you might want to redo the shading. 03:38, 17, 06, 2012

Blur the earpink a bit, and maybe add more depth to the shading - it looks pretty flat right now. 09:43, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit? Also, lighten up the shading on his back/haunch, I can't see the lineart there. 14:54, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 14:58, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Storm, still working? 20:37, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 80% done. There's no light source (or it's coming from underneath?) and the shading is blotchy and looks like it's spray-painted on. You have a week. 20:59, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow(Alt.W2) ~ For Approval
In the SkyClan's Destiny manga, at the time of her warrior ceremony, she was depicted with stripes on her legs and head. Comments? 02:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit larger and blur it. Also, possibly add more stripes to her haunch and/or make the stripes a bit longer so it matches a bit more compared to the apprentice. 02:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink and blur the stripes just a tad. 02:42, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:46, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. 02:47, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

They are for me. Make the ear-pink a tad smaller, it looks like it's about to fall out of the ear, and center it more. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 03:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the leg stripes a tad. 03:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:25, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I believe this is ment to be based off the alt apprentice, right? If so make the haunch stripes go up the haunch more and add more. Good work Ducksplash, I believe this would be 80% complete, imho. 03:28, 17, 06, 2012

Blur the leg stripes a bit more, and I think (just my opinion) that they could be just a bit higher up on the haunch. 09:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear pink ouo 12:36, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. 12:37, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Storm, the pelt isn't required to be smudged into the earpink on the warrior blanks. 12:39, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. 18:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded =) 20:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink a little more~ 21:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I saw waste. =p 21:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit. Nicely done, Duck. You've improved greatly since you last put up a charart. =)

Reuploaded Thanks, Cloudy! 02:51, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Earpink didn't match the others. 03:10, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. 06:14, 18, 06, 2012

Reuploaded 15:18, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: There was a lighter streak down her back. 15:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her chest. --<span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   17:06, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:31, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:12, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:05, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define it just a little more.

Re-uploaded 21:13, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

You know what? Let's go CBA with this. I quite like this image.

Even out the shading on the back, haunch, and tail. Darken it by the belly, define it on the forelegs and tail. 05:06, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes may not be showing. 02:10, June 22, 2012 (UTC)