Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 23

Sorreltail (A) - Declined
Well here is my first tortie. tell me how bad it is. Charm Paw  21:55, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't bad at all! But the tortoiseshell patches aren't like her warrior image. Maplefern May StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 21:59, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is really beautiful Charmpaw!! All I see is maybe add either more shading or highlights.

22:02, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

The white part on the tail should be on the inside.--  Night shine   ♥  22:04, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Maple. Make the patches more like one her warrior's image.

22:05, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

I would say just add some more black. The patches wouldn't be exactly the same on both sides of the cat. it's your call though. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:09, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Eekkk, i hate it. is this any better? Charm Paw  23:41, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, this is coming along very well! But the ear pink is a little hard to see, perhaps find a way to define it more? Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:44, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yep just darken the ear pink a bit--  Night shine   ♥  02:49, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to look more like her warrior image which is show above. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:17, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

How do I define it Charm  Paw  21:18, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what they mean by "define it" but the major difference I see between her warrior image and yours is that the shading on the warrior's image makes it pop-out and 3-D looking. Maybe darken the shading then? Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  23:44, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

To define the ear pink, make it a little brighter and contrasting with her pelt color, then blur it. Also, like Moss said, add a lot more shading, because I can't really see any- I agree with Ashshadow though that the patches don't have to match since it's her other side. -slow realization that when I've been making apprentice images for warriors I've done just that without realizing- insan TA STE  THE  RAIN BOW  eu lar  23:46, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? Charm Paw  00:24, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a little bit more. Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  15:54, February 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * The ear pink is very pale, almost baby-pink. Make it darker and a little more reddish. ✐S  aN  dY  12:08, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 20:05, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

She is away for two days She forgot to tell you Angel  Paw  21:09, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I have her image. should I post It for her Angel  Paw  21:09, February 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * If that's okay with her then go ahead. ✐S  aN  dY  22:36, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but I'm declining this. It's now 5 days on and nothing has happened... ✐S aN  dY  20:03, February 25, 2010 (UTC)