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Whispering Breeze (Ki) - Declined
Wow it feels like a while......my first charart on a laptop, comments? 08:38 Fri Jan 9

Add a few more stripes, thicken them a tad, and lighten up the shading on <== side, I can't see the pattern through it. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:39, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ---> foreleg and lighten the overall shading a bit 11:26, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge and lighten the stripes. They look too dark to me. 17:24, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth the stripes, maybe? They look really hard to me. 19:20, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Gosh I completely forgot Reups I've been so busy sorry 15:49 Thu Jan 15

The forhead stripes still look hard. Good job on her. She's beautiful!^^ 20:49, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes and thin them out. They look really fat, unless they're that way on the other images. 22:55, January 15, 2015 (UTC) The shading on this < side is still a bit too dark? Maybe lighten it? 02:29, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I hate tabbies 09:22 Sat Jan 17

It's still very dark. Lighten it up? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:04, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

If I lighten it anymore I'm going to be asked to define it. It's fine. 18:57 Sat Jan 17

Define the neck/lower face shading a little bit. Doesn't need too much. 21:06 Sat Jan 17

Define the light on her tail. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:44, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes in her forehead match a bit more. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:07, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

define all the shading that isnt on our left side tbh. 11:28, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

You still workin'? 19:00, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading to the left. 20:28 Tue Jan 20

Lighten the shading on the left side of the body, like Gia said, and lighten the shading on that right front paw. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:44, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes and base up a bit, they're pretty dark compared to her other images. 19:49 Thu Jan 22

The stripes on <-- cheek are still hard edged and so his the forehead. ~ ☾Brambleshade The Cookie Monster  is out for you! 21:46 January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Whispering Breeze is a she-cat, actually. Also, shouldn't the earpink be under the shading? 22:39 Thu Jan 22

I've been told it's artists choice, Gia. Meh, personally I put mine under my shading, at least my first or second layer. But yeah it's artists choice. 21:28, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Um, Tbh it's well over a week... ~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:21, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

i'd like to take over when this is declined, if possible. i'm tired of icicle tbh <span style="">00:27 Tue Jan 27

Gah, I thought I saw her reupload, I'm sorry. x.x I'll decline this and if someone wants it, go for it.

Icicle (Ki) ~ For Approval
oh look more kits <span style="">19:42 Sun Jan 18

Re-uploaded oh look waste <span style="">19:43 Sun Jan 18

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit? 19:45, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">21:32 Sun Jan 18

The shading is leaking from <== this side. Blur and define the shading. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:51, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="">15:07 Mon Jan 19

The shading is still leaking at the same place. Perhaps make a new layer, shade over the leaking part and remove the waste? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:43, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Where is it leaking? <span style="">03:18 Tue Jan 20 03:18, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

<== this side. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading just a bit, if you don't mind.

Are you sure those eyes aren't just one plain colour? Also, brighten up the face more please? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

The face brightness looks fine to me. 21:43, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Erase a little of the shading on both front paws, they shouldn't be entirely in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:46, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean "are you sure those eyes aren't just one plain color?" Do you want me to define the pupil shading? Also re-ups <span style="">22:17 Tue Jan 20

re-ups freakin' tails, man <span style="">22:21 Tue Jan 20

re-ups WAAASTEEEE also i fixed the eyes for you, at least i think i did. also dulled the highlights because they were wayway too bright <span style="">22:26 Tue Jan 20

It's still leaking a bit. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:21, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">22:26 Wed Jan 21

re-ups <span style="">22:30 Wed Jan 21

re-ups wow i swear i can't do anything first try lmao <span style="">22:42 Wed Jan 21

re-uploaded 4: a new hope <span style="">23:29 Wed Jan 21

Lol. Could you define the leg shading just a bit? Also, I think the shading is leaking on the head over on <--- this side. Lookin' good! 21:30, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups i'm DONE with this shading uGH <span style="">23:50 Fri Jan 23

are changes showing? <span style="">23:52 Fri Jan 23

It's still leaking. Also, dull down the earpink. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:22, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can I get a second opinion on the earpink? It looks fine to me. <span style="">00:20 Tue Jan 27

The shading is still leaking, however. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:14, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine, but I agree with the shading. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:53, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Star) - CBA
Eh..her pattern is hard :p 20:18, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? This is beautiful. <span style="">22:31 Sun Jan 18

Thin out the stripes. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:22, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading on her cheek looks flat. brighten or smoothen it maybe? Correct me if I am wrong. 13:30, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, I think the stripes are good in terms of thickness. Maybe blur them on a very very very very light setting to make them a bit less hard-edged?

Also, lighten the shading a smidge? Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:47, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 21:04, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a little bit. <span style="">22:08 Thu Jan 22

lighten her a tad, she looks very dark. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:41, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 17:17, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the muzzle(in the pale part only). This is looking lovely! 22:06, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

--> this side of the cheeck is looking a little flat again.. <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:02 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. Just my opinion, though. If someone else says it's flat, then by all means change it. <span style="">00:51 Tue Jan 27

It's fine, darken the stripes a tad. Sorry about my earlier comment to lighten her. O.O <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:31, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups No problem:) 16:25, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

I like this. CBA?

Frogtail (Ki) - For Evaluation
Firetail is back... with Frogkit this time! I used PAINT.NET and colorpicked from his apprentice image, comments? (P.S. this is technically my first charart again since Dustkit got declined) Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 00:18, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's texture... ? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:22, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be texture or not? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 21:55, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

It's a soft mottle-like texture. Which it looks really neat and if anyone nominates it for that I'm gonna like, idk, feed you to the Dark Forest or something.

So I guess I'll just scribble at paintbrush size 4 or something and blur to get mottled texture. Again, everything is from the apprentice image. IDK I guess it looks more like brindled right now. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 23:17, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reups - How's this for mottles? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 02:07, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Really nice. :) define the shading everywhere. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:10, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

That looks really nice for your first! I agree with Fox Girl, please define the shading. <span style="">15:37 Sat Jan 24

Reups Done Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 00:23, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and <== leg. <span style="">00:38 Sun Jan 25

His nose is hot pink. Sure of it. Make it a little light, please. <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

Good design.. really wish mine didn't get declined but oh well.. well done! :) Flameclaw1 (talk) 17:41, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make the nose the same color as the earpink. Make the earpink a little pinker though, it looks almost orange. <span style="">12:31 Mon Jan 26

Reups - Fixed earpink/nose and defined shading on leg + tail. Flameclaw, you will be fine with more practice. That's what I've been doing since I joined PCA - practice, practice, practice. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:54, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is kinda bright now. Tone it down to where you can tell that it's pink, but it's a dark pink. You can always look at images for reference. Also, define the light on the legs. <span style="">00:19 Tue Jan 27

The nose should be black. otherwise, good image! <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:29, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the colour of the Ear Pink. <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! January 27, 2015 23:06 (UTC)

Already said that, Brambleshade. Define the light on the tail and the legs. <span style="">12:38 Wed Jan 28

Snowflake (Ki) ~ For Approval
Best attempt at texture. ^^ 03:06, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to this ==> leg. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:40, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading and blur the neck shading a little. 22:45, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste above the <== ear, and blur the shading a bit. <span style="">19:52 Thu Jan 22

There's no waste, actually o_O my phone was showing something completely different <span style="">22:38 Thu Jan 22

Define the shading, please. i literally can't see any.-- 21:37, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:00, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink on the <== ear a little more. <span style="">02:48 Sun Jan 25

Re-upped 15:39, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. The back paw tells me it's coming from <== here and the rest ==> there. Also, add more shading to ==> leg. She/he looks good! ^^ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:30, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 01:44, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Try adding some more depth to the shading, especially near the haunch area. 19:39, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Shaded Moss (K) - CBA
Idk. *shoves little Shaded Moss towards ya'll* 21:54, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white- he looks pale gray and black. This also needs to be named File:Shaded Moss.kit.png, so I'm gonna rename that for you.

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 22:20, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge the patches more with a size 1 hard edged tool? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:08, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define or add the texture? It's there in his other images. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:14, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''He has texture; hes just very dark so its not really noticable. I lightened his base color a few ticks on the opacity bar to define it, though. 02:07, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

On his other images, the texture is noticeable. However on here I can't even see it. Mind if you can define it? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:23, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the white on the <== leg. <span style="">12:43 Thu Jan 22

Isn't he only meant to have a white muzzle and chest? Because here the white in his face expands to his whole chin. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:27, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Its the same amount i added as on the ancient? 01:20, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did try to define the texture, however.-- 18:12, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the texture, I still can't see it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:04, January 26, 2015 (UTC

Mind if i get another opinion, Burnt? Ive already lightened him a hell of alot, and its about as defined as this as i did on his ancient. If someone else says something, though, ill go ahead and add it. I just dont want to lighten him too much more than this otherwise he'll start to look more gray then black. 10:55, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the texture just fine. <span style="">12:29 Mon Jan 26

Could you darken the texture? Just wondering. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:23, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Its black on 100% opacity =/. Theres really no way i could darken it lmao. I could always lighten his base if someone else agrees that its not very noticable. 21:55, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't see it unless I zoom in absolutely close, (and I have to squint) also, while you're at it, define the light on the tail. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:51, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it perfectly well. It's harder to perfect on these blanks because they're so damn small. I've been staying out of this one, but it's honestly fine and this is being super picky. One, he's a black cat, two, I think Breeze shaded with black, and three, the texture is more than likely black. Of course it's not gonna be super visible.

CBA?

Webfoot (Alt A) ~ For Approval
我讨厌他 =p but I like how this turned out. =) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:04, January 22, 2015 (UTC)

He looks so much like Bramblestar! His right earpink ---> looks dark. Brighten it up a little? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 21:41 Thursday January 22 (UTC)

Is there supposed to be pink on his nose, or is it supposed to be black? There's nothing right there right now, so =P <span style="">22:10 Thu Jan 22

The nose color doesn't matter, however, as for the ear pink, I'll fix that later. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:33, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped lightened up the base color too. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:53, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a tiny bit? He looks almost black in some spots, mainly on the stripe parts- the pale parts are fine, though.

Re-upped <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:56, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Some of the stripes look a tad pixely..mind smudging them a tad? If you don't see which ones, I can make a redline for ya. This is amazing, you did a lovely job. 14:55, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ugh took a damn half hour to get those tabby stripes right. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:16, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think he was ever called a brown tabby...just a brown cat, is that not right? That's why Tornear got an alt, and he didn't get stripes. 19:38, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

He does get his stripes. Brown is just shortening his description, I was told to add stripes to Brackenfur when he was called a light brown cat. Also I love how the stripes turned out and if I was told to remove them I'm probably going to go =O or whatever in fact, I'm not sure if Tornear should be nominated for his stripes. =/ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:10, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Ki) - CBA
I gotta tell ya, I'm getting used to seeing all these kits. Oh my gosh it's so good to be home c: Comments? 18:32, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading- I can't see it at all.

Define the earpink while your at it. 18:36, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, I tried. This base color is a butt to work with... 18:44, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth it out a bit? Right now it looks quite hard-edged, especially along his right leg. 18:47, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

It's pretty smudged already..may I have another opinion? 18:51, January 23, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Define the shading, though. <span style="">23:05 Fri Jan 23

Re-uploaded. 14:37, January 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink, i can barely see any. 20:47, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make the light on the tail a little bigger. shorthair tails are a pain <span style="">21:12 Sun Jan 25

Re-uploaded. That's as much as I can define the earpink or else if it needs more definition I'll have to alter the color. I know right? -.- 21:29, January 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and smooth out the body shading a bit, please. I know Breeze said so above and you didn't, but I think it's a bit too hard-edged for this color.

Re-uploaded. Well I did it. But now the shading almost looks too light. I guess we'll have to see. Snowman where'd all the leads go? I have not seen them around. =/ 12:36, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, nah, it's good now. I'll CBA this for you. =P

Frecklewish (Alt. K) ~ For Evaluation
I know most of these comments might be bout the spots. But don't you think she pretty? (I love her. Its better than my last Charart.)  <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 06:09, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Please remove the collar- she was seen without it in the back of SkyClan's Destiny.

Reups

Tiiiiiimmnnnnnyyyyyyy writing! Maybe put in some more spots, or make some of them bigger. -- 06:40, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

You need this reserve d. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 06:42, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

Oh Crap! I forgot!! D: How did you reserve it fo me last time, Foxy? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you!

Right, go to the main page, there's a table full of names and stuff, then find your username, and write the character you're doing. So just write "Frecklewish (Alt Kittypet) ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:38, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Oh! I just did that! Haha well, thanks! Anymore comments for tonight? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 07:42 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere and add more light to the back. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:44, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:04 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source. Add more light to the back. Adding light is to basically deleting shading. Right now, she looks like as if she was shading on the whole body. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:09, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest you to choose a different light source, don't chose the light source that gives all shading on the back. Also, defining means making the shading more visible, right now I can't even see it. See the other kittypets for reference. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:11, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups  <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:23 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see the shading. Try adding some light to the places where there are light. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:24, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:30 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see any change at all... ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:32, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm.. Lets try this again.. poohie. <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:33 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Gonna hit the hay. Im tired... <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:41 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink, please. 10:58, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a little bit too. Also, please define your light source more. Try adding white on a seperate layer over where the light is coming from, blurring it the same way you did your shading, and lower the opacity a lot. There's a tutorial on the Apprentice Tutorials page. <span style="">12:27 Mon Jan 26

She looks grey. Lighten her up and define the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:25, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I think I erased a little too much shading... I should darken the pots more.. huff <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 20:39 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading. I can barely tell it's there. <span style="">00:25 Tue Jan 27

You're adding too much shading, delete some. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:29, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly I can't see any of the shading. Well, I can see where you put it. Let me help you; you need to put shading in the places where they would be hidden from the sun. First you have to choose a lightsource(i.e. the light is coming at him < like that, hitting the face, right ear, top of the legs and paws, top of the tail, and the back, which is sticking up because the cat is bent over) and make sure every part of the cat shaded, matches with your chosen lightsource. I recommend checking out some kittypet images that have already been approved, and notice the way they're shaded. Later I can make an example for ya, but honestly this is how you do it in a nutshell. I also recommend using gimp if you are not already, I've found it to be the most easiest program to work with, and trust me I've tried them all. But that is a personal preference, but I highly recommend it. You can also look here at the Apprentice Tutorials for help on shading, coloring, tools, etc. And you can also message me on my talk page, I'd be glad to help you. I hope that made sense..lol.. 13:37, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

plus its like the only free program with a working smudge tool You might want to try making her spots a little more splotchy. Spots on cats aren't usually perfectly circular like that. You might also want to try smudging them instead of blurring to give them a furry look. For the shading, look at kittypets that have already been done. I can make you a redline for the shading, if you like. (A redline is basically a guideline of where you put the shading. You dont have to follow it exactly.) <span style="">15:21 Tue Jan 27

I would like the redline, Giaria Thank you. Frecklewish is really difficult.. I choose her because I thought she was going to be easy... Hit me in the back... <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 23:10 January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups This any better? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 23:43 January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Please tell me the waste is clear!? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 23:46 January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Still can't see it, sorry. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:11, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Are you blurring EVERYTHING with the blur tool? For the shading I recommend only blurring at the edges instead, then you can see the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:13, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the all-caps..it always comes off wrong to users. And I can get you a redline either tonight or tomorrow morning. even if it's in addition to Gia's I'll still do it. It'll give you an idea of how it pretty much works. =) 01:11, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

http://oi62.tinypic.com/20i6s2a.jpg This is pretty much how I do my shading on my kittypets. The light source is to the top-right, and is clearly visible. This is a comparison of the redline, one blurred and the other not blurred. Can you see how it looks like the blank is almost 3D looking? That's what you ideally want shading to look like. The only thing I did to the original redline image was use the hue and saturation tool to change the color from red to black. The shading on the blurred version does have some issues, but it's just for demonstration purposes so it's okay. The apprentice tutorials are your best friend when you're starting out. On the topic of the image: Darken the earpink just a little bit and define it more. This is looking really great for your first image, keep it up! <span style="">01:18 Wed Jan 28

For blurring shading, use Gaussian Blur. Should be under Filters>Blur>Gaussian Blur on most art programs. <span style="">12:43 Wed Jan 28

Gaussian blur makes the shading appear off, like it's leaking almost, if you're not sure what you're doing or use too strong of a setting. Using the blur tool works just as well, honestly- it's what I use, when I don't smudge the shading.

Define the shading and darken it some - the image looks flat. 19:37, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Kit) ~ For Evaluation
My first Character Pixel – What do you think? Is it black enough? Or is it still dark grey? – YoungChamp (talk) 07:29, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the ear pink and blur it. Also, fixed the thumbnail for you. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:31, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

This looks great! Just lighten the shading a tad, wow, you did better than my first go with a dark cat. -- 07:39, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't her nose be black, for a black cat? Also, If this is your first Charart, its wonderful! <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 07:46 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I darkened the nose and the ear pink, and I made the shading as clear as I could. I hope there's a difference – YoungChamp (talk) 07:59, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

No need to upload a new file everytime. Blur the ear pink more please. This looks good! =) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:02, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't your heading be For Evaluation? <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS;font-size:12px; color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ ☾Brambleshade <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">The Cookie Monster <span style="font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size:11px;color:maroon; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> is out for you! 08:06 January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I fixed it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:07, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Is the ear pink all right now? – YoungChamp (talk) 08:15, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Please do not put "thumb" behind your image, define the shading please. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:18, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Where's your light source on the tail? I can hardly see it. black cats are a pain to shade  shorthair tails are worse   <span style="">12:24 Mon Jan 26

Also, please define the leg shading a little bit. i could barely tell it was there <span style="">12:36 Mon Jan 26

Define the earpink. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 13:24, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think your base colour is too dark, I colour picked from the loner. Use that as your base colour. -- 21:20, January 26, 2015 (UTC)

Er... I can't upload the image, because when I try to contribute it automatically changes visual mode to source mode, and I can't code an image on my computer. Does someone know how to change the source mode back to visual mode? I tried to change it back, but it says I can't because there is wikitext, though I didn't put any. – YoungChamp (talk)

And what did you mean by 'thumb'? I don't understand – YoungChamp (talk)

By thumb, they mean thumbnail. Lighten up the neck shading a bit. <span style="">00:25 Tue Jan 27

You don't even need to edit the thing to upload a new image tbh I always use source mode. Just click on the image, go to file history and upload a new version of it. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:18, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Is there a difference? Or do I need to define the shading more? – YoungChamp (talk)

Define the shading on the tail a little more, and smudge/blur the earpink. It's really hard-edged. <span style="">02:55 Tue Jan 27

Re-uploaded – My blur tool didn't seem to work on the earpink :/ don't know why. Is the shading on the tail clearer now? – YoungChamp (talk)

Were you on the right layer? Also, make sure you deselect everything by ctrl+alt+a for gimp. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:38, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Is the earpink all right now? I've done the best I can with the blurring. Anything else to do? – YoungChamp (talk)

Perhaps try smudging the earpink instead of blurring it? Its up to you, so its not mandatory. It may smooth it out some, though. 07:37, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

The nose should be black, she's a black cat. Very nice ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:49, January 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Anything else? I having fun creating these Chararts ~

Darken the earpink a little more, and define the light on the tail. <span style="">01:29 Wed Jan 28

Re-upped ~ ~ 02:19, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 19:37, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped ~ ~ 23:06, January 28, 2015 (UTC)

Two things, blur the earpink more and please stop putting thumbnail behind your image. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:24, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Burntclaw, he obviously doesnt know how to, so its not really helping for you to just say "stop" instead of explaining it to him. I know just about every new user had this problem when they first joined. Champ, when your editing your photo, go to source mode so you can see the coding. Once there, youll see that itll say |left/right|thumb]] at the end of your image, you delete that and it will be alligned properly. As for the image, define the shading/light on the tail, please. 00:48, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I've been quite short tempered today. Its just those kind of days when you feel like you're covered in a cloud or something. =£ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:50, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped ~ ~ 02:45, January 29, 2015

She needs green eyes.

What... She does have green eyes. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:37, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

They look blue to me...unless it's my monitor... Perhaps shift the colors around so I can actually tell they're green? o.O They just look really different from her other images.

On my screen though, it looks green. O.o But if it causes confusion to other people, then go ahead and tweak it. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:08, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

They look green to me. <span style="">12:37 Thu Jan 29

Screech (Ki) ~ For Approval
Schools back, hurray! I won't be as active as I was before but I'll still be around, don't worry about that! -- 05:29, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:32, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 05:45, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sniff (Ki) ~ For Approval
anyway heres wonderwall 10:44, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Is the snot intentional? Lol. Anyways, could you define the shading on the tail? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:18, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define it mostly everywhere besides => body <span style="">12:46 Thu Jan 29

Redstar (Alt Star) ~ For Approval
He gets one, in Firestar's Quest, he was said to be a bracken colored cat during Leafstar's nine lives ceremony. Comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:16, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

He has a leader alt for this, and that one doesn't have stripes... so I'm pretty sure this one doesn't. The only reason he even has stripes to begin with is because of our "ginger cats get stripes rule". So, this and his alt leader would just be bracken colored, without the stripes.

 Told you burntclaw told you  ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:30, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

Ha ha ha villianeous aren't I? =P Anyways, blur the shoulder shading more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:39, January 29, 2015 (UTC

I think lightening it up will do. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:40, January 29, 2015 (UTC)

I can hardly see the earpink. Maybe lighten it/the shading up? <span style="">12:42 Thu Jan 29