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Whitewing (W) - For Approval
Welp here we go <3 (Tysm Thunder who kindly gave me my beautiful Whitewing) Moo (talk) 01:27, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add/define the shading depth. -- 01:33, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

some random specks of white are around the image, here

01:44, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 01:59, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Smoothen out the transition between shading depths and define the light on the paws 02:08, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define by adding more shading depth? --Moo (talk) 19:12, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Yes. -- 19:28, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Ok! Will do ty --Moo (talk) 19:49, December 2, 2019 (UTC)

Looking very nice! add some light to the front legs and a little bit on the back foot closest to us. 15:24, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 20:41, December 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add light to the back paw, and I recommend adding more light to the front legs and paws to make them look less flat. 02:18, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not really familiar with the shading and sources, Could someone do me a redline please? Moo (talk) 20:32, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

with the source you have, i would erase some of the shading in these spots that i marked. Could you define the shading depth on the tail as well? 21:01, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are you sure about those light patches? Anyway I did them <3 Moo (talk) 20:48, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

There should only be shading depth on one side of the legs, so remove some on << this side. -- 16:49, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

As soon as I get home tomorrow I Will! --Moo (talk) 08:33, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 21:10, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oh my goodness yes sorry Moo (talk) 03:59, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

I'm a bit confused about what Greenflower said, Ok scratch that - REALLY confused. Can I have some help or explanation? Thank you guys <3 Moo (talk) 06:49, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure myself, Millie, but, here's a redline for where you could put/expand some shading depth to help finish this off (what you've got on the tail is fine, that's why I left it :D)

I'm still confused, What am I doing with the Redline? I already have shading depth, Sorry I'm so tired Moo (talk) 01:15, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

Redline is to just to show where I personally think you could expand the shading you have alread (if that clarifies it?)

Im still confused sorry Moo (talk) 08:11, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

What Max means is where they've redlined on the image is where shading should be expanded or added. You may already have depth, but where Max has shown shows it could stand to be expanded somewhat. 20:14, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Whitewing (K) ~ For Evaluation
21:10, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit. -- 23:51, December 4, 2019 (UTC)

recede the shading everywhere. 02:11, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:39, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth layer more. -- 13:49, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? Moo (talk) 20:52, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:05, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading maybe? Looking a little sharp --

06:09, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth more. It appears you are darkening your shading layer, but that doesn't define the depth as much. Create a new layer of shading, make it thinner than your shading layer, and make it much darker than your shading layer. Smooth it out but leave it a tad sharper than your shading layer, that will help the image with flatness. -- 16:48, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Make the shading smoother? --Moo (talk) 08:34, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:34, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, made it a bit better 20:53, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth more + smooth the depth on the haunch. -- 00:29, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I obviously have issues defining the shading 06:16, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add a little bit more shading on both ears? 17:42, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:32, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you curve the shoulder shading a little more, it would kind of make a "u" shape in that area, and also smooth out the shading on the bum, above the tail too a little?

Reuploaded 20:54, December 15, 2019 (UTC)

Comments? It's been 5 days 01:02, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the face and add some to the jaw; define the depth on the tail and foreleg. -- 01:10, December 20, 2019 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (K) - For Approval
ok 21:18, December 5, 2019 (UTC)

this looks darker than his other images in the set? could you also define the texture a bit too?

reup 02:05, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Can you shade the little chest area poking between the head and foreleg? 04:12, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

reup

nudge 00:04, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

You're only supposed to ask for comments when five days has gone, which it has not. Regardless, I think the texture can be lighter to match the og set? 03:43, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

reup 16:34, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

The texture also seems a little softer, per the apprentice too.

hot kittem 00:05, December 16, 2019 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W)-for evaluation
oof, I will fix this tomorrow, it’s almost midnight-- 05:37, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

I have fixed the file for you, you needed to link it. Remove the black background, this can be done using a wand tool or clicking the delete background button. -- 00:01, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more. 05:11, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Where is the light source? --Moo (talk) 08:34, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is disappearing near the lineart. What I did to fix this was fill the lineart with my shading colour and then blur, so the tool doesn’t blur the shading with the blank space. As for the background, I recommend lowering the opacity of that layer and adding a layer on top with the lineart (full opacity) so you can see where there should be black and where there shouldn’t be. I’m probably not the best for advice though; I’m also only a project kit. --

22:25, December 7, 2019 (UTC) Oof, I think I was seeing the old version (my page didn’t reload). Nvm --

22:42, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

add depth to the shading and there is a corner of waste where the tail bends. this looks very good! 00:56, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the eye color a bit. They're supposed to be sky blue. Smooth out the haunch shading a little while you're at it too. Good job so far, Oceanpelt! -- 01:11, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-uploaded (shading, eye color, and waste.-- 03:29, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light on the front legs? 08:58, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is very flat. Try adding a second layer of shading (but only cover like half of what you've originally shaded) to add depth. 23:41, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Re-up (also it looks like the legs are a different color so I will mess around with it tomorrow)-- 03:14, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the shading on the back tail. 21:05, December 9, 2019 (UTC)

Still a little dot of waste near the bend of the tail :P --

05:36, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

re-up-- 12:05, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out your shading layers a bit. -- 01:01, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Will re upload soon, GIMP has been acting up. (When I try to select the image to erase white on the inside the eraser doesn’t work)-- 18:55, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Still need to add light on the front legs? 10:35, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Oh noes, I messed it up- 19:20, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

There's a little bit of waste in in the bottom left corner. And your shading layers still need to be smoothed out a bit. 19:41, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Curve the chest shading a bit, and I would do a run-through for leaking shading. -- 20:16, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Wasptail (W) ~ For Approval
I couldn't tell if there was texture on the apprentice or just the design of the stripes, so I left it as is.

16:02, December 6, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like there is a LITTLE texture on the apprentice, but I had to look very close to see it so I would say it’s fine-- 03:05, December 8, 2019 (UTC)

Looking at the old warrior and apprentice, I think there's some faint highlights on it and the stripes look a tiny bit smudgier? The earpink looks a bit dark compared to her other images too, is that shading? could you erase some of it, if it is? The shading you have looks good, and this is only a suggestion that you don't have to do, but perhaps try a warmer shading tint? you could try red, I think that would look nice. Again, you don't have to if you'd rather keep the tint you have. 21:25, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

User asked for an extension until the weekend due to in real life obligations. 04:31, December 17, 2019 (UTC)

Spider Paw (Alt. W) - CBA
07:21, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes green to match the set? Nicely done! 17:18, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. thanks vec :) 17:33, December 7, 2019 (UTC)'''

Could you give a bit more shape to the shading, especially the haunch? I also think it might be leaking on the haunch, speaking of.

Define the shading depth on the haunch triangle/belly triangle thing. -- 00:30, December 10, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:43, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

i will reupload soon, aight? 06:30, December 16, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:12, December 17, 2019 (UTC)'''

CBA? 02:43, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (W) - For Approval
16:44, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste and miscolored pixels on the tail. -- 16:48, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:10, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the stripes are slightly sharper on her other images.

Re-uploaded. 22:19, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt. W 2) - For Approval
#challengetime2 -- 21:35, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Please tell me you didn't trace from Sunjaw's version without her permission. Normally I'm not one to comment on stuff like that... but I'm a little concerned because the stripes are almost identical to the version Sun was going to post. ​​​​​​

I don't think it was her intention to trace. Even if it was, it was allowed on Hawkfrost, Tigerstar, Bramblestar and so on. 22:02, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Tracing was allowed on those images because the whole point of the redo was to make sure they match as close to 100% as possible. That is the only reason where tracing is allowed if the images need to match exactly. Other than that, no one should be tracing another person's image without their explicit permission. 22:14, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Potato did not trace over Sun's image exactly. She is very aware that the stripes seem similar, but they aren't the exact same. They have different placements. Many of the features are different, for example, the white, tan, texture, eyes, ear/nose pink and pupils are all different. She may have used Sun's image as a reference, which, in my opinion, is all right. The smudging style is different from Sun's and you can clearly see the placement isn't the same. She assures you this isn't copied. 22:45, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Ripple, this does not concern you. This is a matter between Potato and the leads, and I'm not liking how you seem to be speaking for her without her being here. Unless you know something we don't, I don't think you should be doing this. The stripes themselves look traced, and given that Sunjaw is not here, I don't think her image should be used as such without her permission. That does count as theft. Whether you think it's okay or not does not change the fact that the stripes were traced without permission from the person who uploaded the version that Potato is referencing. ​​

After some alone time and thought, I'm going to tell my side of the story.

I did not, and had no intent, to plagiarize Sun's image. I know plagiarism isn't allowed. Yes, the image is similar, but I did not do the stripes the way you think I did. I looked at the stripes, and drew the stripes based on the image. No copying stripes. I layered the image over again and revised (again no copying) based on the image Sun made. I did a lot of things different than her, and the stripes are no exception.

Please understand that I never had any intentions on plagiarism, never, not even once. It looks similar but I reassure all of you they are different. They are, I am being honest. -- 00:13, December 16, 2019 (UTC)

It does seem extremely weird though, that when you compare the two images, the stripe placement is almost pixel-for-pixel. Potato, I'm not angry or mad or anything of the sort; I'm honestly just so baffled at how similar they look. Would you object to letting either myself or another lead viewing the file you have so we can verify for ourselves and to squash the uneasy feeling that some of us are getting? ​

Um yes, you can... -- 03:58, December 16, 2019 (UTC)

Wishkit (K) - CBA
why do i always do charart at 2 am 07:00, December 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:43, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Mallowtail (Ki) - For Approval
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Define the shading on the non-white areas on both images. 13:46, December 17, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so I've spent the last day or so trying to get the defined shading on this, and I honestly can't. I'm redoing it on the warrior anyways, but it's a little more difficult on this one and nothing I'm trying looks anywhere near how I want it to be.

Mallowtail (W) - For Approval
I would just like to say that after the kit and this, my hands hurt. ​​

Can you add some shading to the back leg closest to us? -- 19:45, December 16, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oops. ​

See above. 13:47, December 17, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Fidgetflake (K) ~ For Approval
19:49, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add a very small amount of whiter flecks along the upper back/spine? That's sort of what I have on the MC but it's not too visible. Also, do you want one of the files, maybe?

Yee, that'd be greatly appreciated! ^^ 19:53, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 21:05, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

Shadowstar (W) ~ For Approval
From being called a warrior in SL 19:49, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

Thornclaw (K Alt) ~ For Approval
help 19:49, December 18, 2019 (UTC)

Willowshine (k alt2) - For Approval
02:58, December 19, 2019 (UTC)

Willowpelt (K) ~ For Evaluation
This looks horrible I know 09:25, December 19, 2019 (UTC)