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Thornclaw (W) ~ Redone
Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?

Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now lighten it and add more shading all around. 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch -- 01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-Sorry this took so long, I lost his shading layer, so i had to re-make his shading layer, and then, i rushed it, and got this....^^; Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and blur the highlights. 14:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Wow....that was fast ;D Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred more. 15:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-it has now been blurred to a max. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, it still needs to be blurred and blended a little more. 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried, had like 1% affect every here and there, but not much.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:26, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, I have some advice for you that helped me before I learned the other-worldly powers of the guassian blur tool. If you smudge the shading a lot with the second-to smallest or third-to smallest brush, then blur it on 100%, that actually helps to make the shading have a natural gradient. 00:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

.....What? I'm sorry, i'm diselxic..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 12:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

What don't you understand? You use layers, yes? 21:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

He still seems kind of shiny. Maybe dull the highlights a tad? Sky- Killer of Daleks and Cybermen 22:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

@Ivy....I don't understand any of it, and No, i don't..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The shading. It needs to be blurred. 22:57, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

sighs* Alright, let me try to rephrase it (it's going to be more difficult since you don't have layers) The smudge tool (which is a hand with the pointer finger sticking out) is what you need. Use it like you would normally do to something to smear it, make it go back and forth. Then, take your blur tool. There should be a setting somewhere that has a bar and some numbers, it should say "Rate", slide it to the right until it says 100%. It should really help smooth your shading out a lot. This should be much more informative, yes? 03:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, i got it that time :) I'm sorry....I can understtand things that well, and then i get sonfuesed, and then i get mad, and then i kill a pillow.....DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the shoulder, move it up a bit, darken the highlight on the haunch, and blur all the shading and highlights. 03:51 Thu Oct 6

Okay, give me some time, my laptop is being spazzy, so, let me get it squared away, or let me buy a new one, give me like two or three days, 'kay? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, my laptop is fixed now, give me sometime, all right? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

No. Maplepool, I'm sorry, but we can't wait forever. Either fix this or withdraw this. 14:00, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed it, i was talking about giving me time  to fix Thornclaw :P should have been more clear on that, sorry ^^;  Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:42, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's what I was talking about. The shading still needs to be blurred. 16:19, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eye. 01:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maple, this hasn't been re-uploaded since the third. Please reupload soon or it will be declined. 03:27, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

If the leads wish it and Maple gives me permission, may I take over this once Brackenfur is completed? 15:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur ~ Redone


OA was either Icethroat21, Sandstar12, or Moonleaf:). She needed to be redone as longhair. Comments? 11:44, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The original artist was Icethroat, Sandstar just changed the eye colour, and I just tweaked it :). Blur the chest and leg shading. 17:41, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading all together as well. 19:38, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and blur the gray tansistion. And blur the shading alltohether. 20:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and make the transition form white to gray smoother. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Now blur the shading. 13:31, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:55, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Chest shading needs to be blurred and lightened. 11:33, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

^ Looks like someone forgot to sign! 00:48, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:44, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Define the earpink; other than that, I think its awesome! =3 21:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source. 23:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (W) - Redone
I redid the stripes, but kept the pattern the same. It wasn't clear as to why the stripes needed to be change, but here's what I got. Comments? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the white and brown meet, and darken the shading. 21:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. And dull it a little bit. Nice job. Senbonzakura  Dance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Much better. Make the ear pink smaller, please. 21:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I was getting tired of the old image. xD Nice job, smudge the white into the pelt minorly. 00:03, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and perhaps add a few more. It looks a little too spaced-out. 00:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:21, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earr pink smaller and redder. 21:27, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

And more triangular. 00:41, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- text? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:34, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's still problems with the ear pink. Center it, make it triangular, and redder. 14:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- better? ☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:21, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the stripes on her tail and haunch. Center the ear-pink. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is way to bright and make it a little but darker and blur it. Make the stripes darker and maybe thicker. This is good! 01:43, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink and define the stripes on the face. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:44, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (D) Re-done
OA is Mousetalon, needed to be long haired. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink. Looks good. 22:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, and redden the earpink. xD 22:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the shading thicker. I advise you to make the haunch shading darker than the rest. 22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I knew the shading was too light...oh well. Re-uploaded. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:20, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, redder, and blur it. 22:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The evil ear pink strikes again. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Its better now. Blur the edges of the earpink. 22:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Try it now. Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 02:43, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize the shading more, it's somewhat hard to see. Looking good! 02:59, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How bout now? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="cyan" >Sky- <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Allons-y! 10:48, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little more, and blur it just a small bit. Very nice. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:35, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Helloooo? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 15:32, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink JUST a little bit more :3 <span style="">21:49 Mon Oct 10

Blur and maybe lighten the highlights a tad. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 18:49, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderheart (W) - Redone
So it said Cinderheart needed to be done for multiple reasons, mainly to get rid of the Y stripes and add dapples. Sorry about the fail dapples. XD Do I need to darken the stripes? OA was either Sand or Bramble I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:26, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Paleclaw, if you say you fail or suck ever again, some stuff is going to go down. Define the shading on the legs and haunch a little more ;3 The stripes look good, better light then dark actually. 23:28, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a ibt? Also, make the eyes more blue, they look a bit too gray. 23:32, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *slowly backs away from Splashy* But what if it's true.....? *hides* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:37, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno if it's supposed to be like this or you want it to, but she looks blue-ish. 00:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my god. Paleclaw. -dies- THIS IS AMAZING. 00:15, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her eye color, it looks to pale. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:18, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yes, it was tinter blue. I usually do that with my chararts by coloring the shading, but I desaturated it a bit more now. And I darkened the eye color. Thank you Icy! *bows* So, no more apprentices, even tweaks, right? Cause I wanna do all her images, but that'd only be the kit if we're not tweaking the apprentices anymore. I personally think maybe we should tweak the ones that look completely different from the main image, since they're gonna sit like that till OOTS is done if not, and that's kind of a long time.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Omg.....this is gorgeous Paleh! You never fail to make a charart look awesome. Anyways, darken the shading a teensy bit and blur the earpink a bit more. This is epic! :3 10:44, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and there are no apprentice tweaks. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:42, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whitetail (Q) ~ Redone
Needed to get rid of the prickly shading, it was on the re-do list. Comments? 00:02, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Who was the OA? :3 Looks great! Blur the haunch and tail shading, and blur the earpink. 00:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I forgot that. OA is Darkhallows. 00:05, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 00:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does she have the FAINTEST stripe of waste on her back? lol, i just read her page, how do you get a PALE WHITE cat? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:21, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I checked, I don't think there's waste. And I know, right? xD 00:26, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she be shorthaired? Aren't all WindClan cats being redone to be short haired? (at least that's what I remember xD) Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

In her description it says that she has thick fur. Therefore, she has long fur. 22:36, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. And yes, usually all WindClan cats are sleek and shorthaired. It's different if they were described as long furred. 04:57, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the clarification :3. Blur the shading on the midriff a tad. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  14:52, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Midriff? Sorry I dunno where that is xD 15:36, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her belly and right infront of her haunch. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  16:50, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 04:50, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. <font color="white" style="background:black">☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:09, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:07, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Tweaked
I re-did the stripes and shading, and make the scar more redder. Kinda taking a break from Crookedstar's image. I was up all night perfecting his deputy image. Comments? 14:01, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Very good! Could you desaturate the stripes some, they stand out a lot. <font color="white" style="background:green">☾Mint☽ Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 14:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks :) I have no idea how to desaturate stripes on GIMP, so I just lightened them a tad. Comments? 14:32, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The stripe looks a bit blobish, thin it out a tad. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  14:51, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean? They're supposed to be thick. 15:02, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a tad overblurred and not natural. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  15:04, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The scar is fine, it looks like Tigerstar's, and he is approved. 15:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also make him more golden-brown. He looks yellowish. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  21:20, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scar the same color as the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:50, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Good but blur everything and make the stripes on the face thicker somewhat. And the stripes look to...unreal like it's placed by a person. Try to make it more absract slightly. 01:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes are fine, Sandstorm. There are other images like Brackenfur's that have been approved. 01:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the front feet. 23:59, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The front feet are fine...the shading's there, it's supposed to be dark from the angle I did the shading at. How is he yellowish...? 23:49, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

He looks more green-brown than golden brown. Like his fur is tinted more with yellow and green than it is golden or brown. Hope that made sense ^^. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  02:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I lightened the highlights - is that better? 15:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes browner too. Ack, i feel like such a nag D:. Sorry! ^^ Selene;  She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone
Alright, I don't want to hear the complaints about this being redone. Scarletwind stated herself that the warrior image need to be redone as well. The coloring was off between the two, and the shading was a little blotchy. Plus, I tried to add stripes but I really couldn't. OA was Darkhallows, added stripes. Comments? 17:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The white looks orange. Make it white. Lighten the shading, make the strpes thinner and add more. Define the ear pink and add depth to the eye. Define the white as well. 17:30, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've covered as much as I can with these stripes, and the artist who redoes the warrior can copy this style of stripes. Derp, I also noticed I forgot the collar. 17:48, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I never redid his warrior charart, but this is fine. Make the colors match his warrior charart a bit more and thin out the stripes a bit. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 20:18, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the title. It was supposed to say Billystorm KP. Rainface star  Ghost time!  20:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

THere seems to be a small speck of orange on the tip of the tail. That supposed to be there? 22:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If you still see the orange at the tail, the changes are in the file history. 23:09, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Splashy, plesae make the stripes thinner and add more. 22:43, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefang (E) ~ Redone
Needed to be a sandy color, as well as have stripes. Ivystripe told me to use Sandstorm's pelt color, and I did, but I darkened it a tad. OA is the wonderful and awesome Riverpelt. 01:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty :) I think there is some miscolored lineart on the paw. It's orangy. 04:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

And perhaps make the earpink a tad redder? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Trick <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange">and gimmie candy 05:30, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 05:43, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm, define the stripes on the front legs, I can't really see them *needs glasses* 11:52, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her haunch and tail. I had an image ready for this, but, your's is good. <font color="white" style="background:black">☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:14, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
 * There is your glasses xD I dont know, cats can wear glasses?!* Oh yes add some stripes on the chest, only two small lines, I imagining it now and I thing it is good idea. *Her brain is sleeping, can someone wake it please?* *Happy Leaf-storm* Leaf-storm,19:00,October 10,2011 (UTC)

I see no need to add stripes to the chest. Not all cats have them. Also, sorry Mint. First come, first serve. 22:55, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:01, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (MC) - Redone
Redone to match the warrior charart. OA was Icecloud. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes on the arm + chest look darker than in the warrior. Add some depth to the herbs that are closest to us. 03:33, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. lol. I forgot the highlight layer... - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:44, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the shading a smidge. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 03:49, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lionstar (L) ~ Redone
OA was Sandwich989, and it needed stripes and the shading redone and since it only had one image, i redid it. Comments? 19:29, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, it's very bright. The stripes a little awkward, they look orange and the fur is light ginger. May just be me, but desaturate them a tad. <font color="white" style="background:black">☀Mint☀ Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I dont have a problem with the stripe colour. 21:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't either. I think it looks good. Add more depth to the eye and blur/smudge the left earpink. 00:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes look amazing, Iceheart, so don't change a thing. Lighten the shading a tad though. 06:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Applefur (W) - Tweaked
Alright, original artist was Honeyfur :3. Tweaked the shading, fixed the mottles, and altered the base color a tad to make her more brown. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  20:25, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading a lot. 22:42, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you mottled the earpink too. Define the earpink and make it a solid color. 02:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Spiderstar - Tweaked
Bah, I've done better, OA= senior Oblivion and I added teh patch on his shoulder- 02:01, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

No! I wanted to do this one!!! xD Perhaps not so many black lines on the left side of the patch? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky is better than <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 02:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps change the earpink color so it doesn't look like the skin. Nice work. 02:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I cant do anything about the earpink, srry - 02:47, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like there should be more shading on the wound :P I'm not sure how you're going to do that, though.... but try anyway <span style="">03:37 Tue Oct 11

Birdflight (Q) - Redone
Her stripes and shading needed to be redone. The original artist was Maplefern. So yup, comments? I have approval from Scarletwind for redoning this btw 02:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 06:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't want to do much to the earpink as I got it straight from the warriior charart. 12:42, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her pupils look dialated. Can you make them smaller please? Very pretty btw ^^  20:51, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenflower (ki) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow. Needed to be pale ginger and stripes like before. I really like this ^^ Comments for improvement? 18:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)