Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 63

Percy (R)-Approved
I withdrew my other one so... here's Percy! I actually kinda like this one xD. Comments? --- 11:02, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hm...I've never seen Percy as a character before. The ear pink is too big and kinda a odd shape. 12:19, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't this over the limit? There can only be 35 up for approval and this is the 36th. River pelt Deputy of StormClan 13:06, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, Nettlsplash is being withdrawn, so this is fine. Anyway, fix up the earpink. 13:15, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I didn't see that. XD But yeah I agree with Beautiful Oblivion and Silverdapple! River pelt Deputy of StormClan 13:28, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

i think you should make the earpink smaller. but im just an apprentice so idk. Sunny frost  13:29, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is too big. Blur the stripes more. 14:24, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Shrink the ear pink so its not as big as we think, then blur the stripes on the fur

ha ha I got that from Zorth ;P (i made up the las part) and now this means I can't do Percy when Rockshade gets approved :( (DON'T WITHDRAW THOUGH!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD!)

Reuploaded Thanks, Tawny!! And, sorry, I didn't know you were planning to do his image too. xD Anyways, I blurred the stripes and fixed the ear pink. What else? --- 20:17, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some more shading? I'm an apprentice as well... Willowheart May StarClan light your path! 00:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

lol willow, i second that last part. but i think it looks great, me being an apprentice :P Sunny  frost  01:10, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried adding some more shading, but it didn't go so well. I couldn't blur it because it made the stripes unevenly blurred xD. I just added some to the head. Anything else? --- 01:19, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes and darken the entire thing just a bit. 02:03, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added more stripes and darkened the whole thing. Anything else? --- 10:38, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur it a bit more? 15:31, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

lol its okay Cherr Cherr (mah new nickname for you!!O.O) anyways, I'd just say to blur and center the earpink :P

Reuploaded Lol, Tawny! Thanks for the new name :P Anyways, I blurred the earpink and centered it. Anything else? --- 20:40, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes on the belly and make the ear-pink like a triangle. 23:06, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I believe you meant the chest. The stomach has enough stripes. 01:49, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I mean the front part of it. 04:30, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well... I just added some stripes to the chest and I made the earpink like a triangle. Anything else? --- 11:22, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. -- 18:23, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is just me experimenting, but try making the stripes reach down farther. Don't save it if you don't like it, but it could give it a more...tabby effect. 18:33, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I centered the ear pink, but for the stripes, I tried to do that but, it made the stripes meet each other so I just left it with the short stripes. Anything else? --- 11:07, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some stripes to the paws. 18:00, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes to the paws. What else? --- 01:05, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add stripes to the back legs. 01:42, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yup add stripes to the back and front right legs other than that Nice!! ShadowandBlue 13:53, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added stripes to the back and front right legs. Anything else? 15:26, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

The line-art is blurred a lot in various places and blur the highlights. 20:12, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the highlights, but I wasn't sure where the blurred lineart was... other than that, what else? 23:19, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Theres blurred line-art along the back and tail. Shrink the ear pink a tad. -- 23:59, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? 11:28, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are really. . . round. IDK, make them pointier if that makes sense. Also add more stripes to the shoulder, there's none there. Darken the ear pink and nose, lighten the eyes. 20:33, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't make the stripes pointier, though I tried xD. It made it look... strange xD. Should I just leave it like this or should I try to make it pointier again? Other than that, is there anything else? 11:10, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, or darken the shading. -- 22:07, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, because they look unnatural. But it could just be my computer screen... Willow heart  1231  00:39, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Make the earpink smaller. 04:25, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? 20:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes to tail and face. Blur highlights and darken shading.-- 01:14, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? 12:01, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Mmm.... I just realized my changes weren't showing up.... I'll try again in a day or too, if I have time. 22:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It shows my changes now. Anyway, is there anything else for me to do? 16:06, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks lovely :) CBA? 23:50, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. 20:11, September 16, 2010 (UTC)