Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Thornclaw (Alt A) ~ Redone
Redone for odd stripes and colour and shading, OA was some user called Berryflower123 who couldn't art to save her life. Comments? c; 09:21 Mon May 13

Can you define the stripes? Right now it kinda just looks like texture. 11:51, May 13, 2013 (UTC)

In real life some ginger cats don't have overly defined stripes. I'll change it if someone else agrees however. 06:36 Tue May 14

No I agree they should be defined more. Plus, I'm not sure exactly how it works with things like this, but he is specifically a tabby in his main description. I can't remember if her was called a ginger tabby in any of the countless times he was mentioned as ginger though. Either way, they could use some defining.

I honestly think the stripes are fine. They looks like stripes, even if they are faint, so he is a tabby. 03:46, May 16, 2013 (UTC)

They don't really look like stripes to me, they look more like texture, but eh *shrugs* I won't make a fuss if they're kept like this.

Heatherstar (L) ~ Tweaked
OA be Mounty, tweaked to be paler. Comments? Bb un   legs  01:17, May 15, 2013(UTC)

It looks...redone...almost. Like, the shading is completely different from what it was before now. Or it it just my computer being a noob 09:07 Wed May 15

No, the shading does look different from before. 09:10 Wed May 15

Very different. Regardless of if this was tweaked or redone which I won't currently question, the shading didn't need to be changed.

The shading is exactly the same as the original file's. All I did was tweak the base coat, and that's it. Bb un   legs  18:14, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

It's not exactly the same at all, you can see it quite clearly. The shading was changed in some way, and it shouldn't have been.

I agree with Paleh. It does look different. Comparing the images in the history, something does look amis with the file, but I can't place my finger on it.

Did Mounty use a darker version of the pelt to shade, or did she use black or a multiply layer? 03:47, May 16, 2013 (UTC)

On this particular image I'm not sure, but from the files she's sent me, I know she used some color on multiply on a lot of them.

They look the same to me, the shading just looks too dark for the image. 01:48, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Due to popular demand, I have fixed 'er up. How's this paleness? Bb un   legs  01:03, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Thornclaw(Alt Ki) - Redone
OA is Rowan, redone for multiple issues. Comments? 01:32, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading some? He's cute :3 09:07 Wed May 15

Re-uploaded Thanks~ 21:44, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Copperpaw (A) - Redone
Okay heeerrreeesss.... Copperpaw! Way too lazy to list reasons for being redone. OAs were me and Ivyheart. Comments? 22:50, May 16, 2013 (UTC)

Make the color more ginger; it looks brown to me. 23:41, May 16, 2013 (UTC)

Erase the waste behind the left hind leg? ^-^ 01:44, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

I disagree with making it more ginger, it looks dark ginger to me. Dark ginger does tend to look brownish just in general. I think it's fine as is. This is great Scar!

Re-uploaded Just erased the waste 20:53, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Foxleap (A) - Redone
Redone to match other images. 03:55, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt.Ki) ~ Redone
redone for reasons 05:46, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad. Omfg skt .o.

Minty (Lo) - Tweaked
Tweaked to make a pale muzzle; comments? 16:15, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Although this isn't what it was nominated for, could you lighten the base a tad? It looks darker than the other images. Bb un   legs  18:05, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:06, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened it just a bit more. 15:59, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Tweaked
OA be Scar, tweaked to give her a pale muzzle. Comments? Bb un   legs  18:12, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Can you make it more pale just a tad more? 20:54, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  20:59, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Diesel (Lo) ~ Tweaked
I did a thing that made the white underparts whiter whoo. OA was me. Comments? 03:45, 18, 05, 2013

Nightwhisper(W) - Tweaked
OAs were Scarlet and Berry, tweaked for color. Just played with the hue/saturation tool on paint.Net until it looked alright. Comments? Changes aren't showing. 00:02, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Bramblestar (K) ~ Tweaked
OAs are Iceheart22 and Mounty, tweaked to have a pale underside on the tail. (Idk what to call it??? Undertail?? Idk??) Anyway, comments? 02:09, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Bramblestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OAs are BlueOrca and Mounty, tweaked to have a pale underside on the tail. Comments? 02:06, May 19, 2013 (UTC)

Tangle (Lo) ~ Redone
Redone to match the other two. OA was Stormboot. Comments? 02:29, 19, 05, 2013

Ferncloud (Star) ~ Redone
Redone to match better, Oa was me. 04:14 Sun May 19

Lighten the dapples and the stripes tons. 04:15, May 19, 2013 (UTC)