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Cloudmist (Lo) ~ For Evaluation
First charart! Hopefully this goes well. The turtorials were really useful. Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job for your first one! Smudge the shading and lighten it a bit though. 04:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded (thank you! :) ) - Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:06, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if you're aware, but her base on the apprentice image is pure white. I can't tell because the brightness on my desktop is lowered right now.

There are some sharp white pixels on the <--- front leg (where it meets the rest of the body) and on the other front leg towards the shoulder. Probably just missing some shading there. :P 19:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded My screen was at max brightness, but lowered it now and managed to find the white spots. It still looks sorta white to me, but I tried to pale the shading to hopefully make it look less gray if it did. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the image, for instance the belly? — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  14:38, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light a bit on the legs and tail. 00:51, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure about the depth Shadowbright67 (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe just add a touch more depth to the shading, and define the light on the paws again

Maybe darken the ear pink? Shypaw11 (talk) 21:54, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart on the belly, near the <--- leg. 02:16, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Couldn't really catch the shading off-lineart so I'm not sure if its still there after using the eraser by the leg and belly. Shadowbright67 (talk) 03:57, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Leaking away from the lineart means it's not reaching the edge of the lineart. On the belly, there's white space between the lineart and the rest of the shading, it's right by the edge of the leg at the bottom of the belly. 03:10, January 9, 2017

This is probably minor, but the nose color on the apprentice image is a very different color :) 02:18, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Right, thanks for explaining what it meant. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:14, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Just smooth out the shoulder shading and then it'll seem good to go. 23:37, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sort of changed eye color, because at first, I saw it silverish, but when I got on my phone, it looked pale blue. Shadowbright67 (talk) 01:31, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Wavepaw (A) - For Approval
she's waving buh-bye to 2016 too 03:11, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Thank god this terrible year is over. Define the light on the back paws. 02:19, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:38, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear. 03:34, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a little bit? 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:25, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yes, I forgot to say I was going to be gone for this week but I messaged Cloudy 00:06, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the silver patches seem a little dark to be silver, and not just gray. Also, I'm having a hard time making out what are the white patches, what's silver, and what's shading on the face. Maybe define all of that a little? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:00, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:44, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Silver still looks too dark. 00:47, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:14, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading c: 17:19, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:36, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define teh shading more. 23:37, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) - CBA
~Patch   feather~   15:18, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just me, but I don't think the tint of the brown matches the other images. It seems a bit too...dark. 01:20, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think there should just be a little more marks with a slight lighter shade so it's a bit like a gradient effect? (what am I even

Re-uploaded I can't tell if it looks any lighter. I used a much lighter brown though. ~Patch   feather~   16:48, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Would you like the file? The pattern doesn't seem to match correctly, as Sunjaw did it a certain way. 14:59, 1/03/2017

Perhaps add more speckles on the underside of the tail, as the other images seem to have a few more there

Re-uploaded Yeah, I think the file might help. ~Patch   feather~   14:22, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

I'm struggling to see the earpink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:26, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be a few speckles going down the leg on the kit and apprentice image. Could you add those? 03:13, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  20:49, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, sorry I've been busy. ~Patch   feather~   16:10, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:36, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Duckkit (Star) - CBA
First original design. ^^ And yes, I did surgically place the short-haired tail onto this one. He's only described with a "straight tail", not a tail like his father, who's described with a "tail like a reed". Comments? 02:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little bit! It looks super cool. :DDD

He looks really greenish-yellow. Can you make him brown?

Reups I was thinking the exact same thing right after I posted it, Jayce. XD Found a different shade that I liked. 02:46, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you shift it just a little bit more? Now he looks slightly orange... but that could also be my screen.

Reups. Yeah, you're right. 02:52, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It's possibly my screen problem or my eyes? But to me it looks like... it has a ginger pelt with greenish stripes?

Reups I could see that for the stripes, but not so much on the pelt color. Probably because I've already changed it three times already in one day. Can I have a second opinion on the pelt color please? 05:09, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I have to agree, it looks more brownish gold than anyting. 05:35, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups You know what they say: fourth--er, fifth time's a charm, right? 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest, and I feel like there should be shading under the chin/cheek, or along the lower cheek, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:03, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups  22:42, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:34, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) - For Evaluation
I am a lot happier with this one! I like her eyes. 02:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reup 02:57, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading again please. 03:03, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:12, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the body (sorry that I'm not giving you a break). 03:37, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the <-- side 03:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be darkened - but it's probably the tint. Is the layer on Multiply? Try that if it's not, or change the brightness setting/saturation/contrast setting =)

Reuploaded 04:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste from the above <-- hip all the way to the underside of the tail. 04:42, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:36, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the eye-depth

​Reuploaded 21:50, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of shading to the collar? 00:14, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the bottom of the tail, and possibly darken the shading? 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:24, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading more. 15:12, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:59, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

darken the shading. not define, but darken. somewhere there should be a menu for "Hue" or "Brightness," for example, in firealpaca it's under filter. i believe that's what you use? anyway, darken it. 00:45, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:10, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's actually quite a bit of very light waste all around the image. 03:12, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:07, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the collar shading?

Reuploaded 22:48, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but shading appears to be leaking away from the lienart along the back, tail, and left cheek. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:06, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:21, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the eye depth a bit. 21:04 Wed Jan 11 Reuploaded 21:55, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Darktail (Loner) - CBA


hahaha i'm not living up to the other artists' great art sorry guys

also ill fix the waste above the back later 03:39, January 6, 2017

Smoothen out the shading 03:40, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It might be me, but I can't really see the earpink. Besides that, nice work! :) Shadowbright67 (talk) 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Blend the shading more, please.  12:14 Fri Jan 6 

reuploaded i just realized how awful that shading was 22:59, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the hind leg closest to us. :DD 21:00, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded stuff things insert creative message here 00:41, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the paws, except for the very front one?

reuploaded also fixed where the shading was leaking away from the lineart a bit 23:44, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit! 02:15, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading should be lightened by a teeny bit =)

reuploaded oops haha i left that on the darker opacity from when i was messing with the shading 21:27, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:34, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Fallowfern(E) ~ CBA


Maybe add just a teensy bit of shading on the two front paws? I know the light's coming from the front so they shouldn't have much on them, but not having any shading makes them look flat. Same goes for the ears. 00:11, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

I think it's a good idea to add some shading on her shoulder so it like connects to the back shading^^

Reuploaded

CBA? 21:59, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Quailkit (Star) ~ CBA
16:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be two unfilled white pixels on --> side of the tail

Reupload 17:50, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's an extra grey pixel on the belly, near the <-- leg. 03:18, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define/darken the shading on the head a bit! :) 02:14, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload 18:32, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 22:00, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) - For Approval
Why was shading this so frustrating? 00:14, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

It looks as though there's an unfilled pixel on the <--- ear. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:21, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Messed with the shaidng, but as far as I can see, there aren't any unfilled pixels in the ears. 00:24, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 13:01, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, but the hue seems to shift throughout the pelt for me. It looks sort of pale yellow, but that may be the shading. 23:14 Wed Jan 11

Re-uploaded. The base color is completely gray and the same throughout, so it must have been the shading as you suggested. I made the shading pure black instead of tinted, hopefully that fixed the issue (although it didn't look yellowish to me?). 21:20, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 5) ~ For Approval
He has a russet alt and a pale ginger alt, but he was also called dark ginger. Comments? 14:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Dull down the neon. 17:08, 1/08/2017

Reuploaded. 20:03, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs 23:38, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:02, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the belly color a bit? Looks too blotchyTawnyBracken (talk) 09:05, January 11, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. It was already smudged, but I went and smudged it a little more. 20:04, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back foot that we can see all of. It doesn't seem like there's shading there at all, when there kinda has to be. Also define the light on the tail.

Reuploaded. 13:33, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen the stripes a bit? When I first saw this, I thought you just drew lines on it. Sorry if I'm giving too much criticism...TawnyBracken (talk) 00:31, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. I redid the stripes, as I like this pattern a bit better. 01:24, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the stripesTawnyBracken (talk) 02:22, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to smudge the stripes, as they are only a few pixels wide at most, and smudging them would make them look distorted, to the point where one might not be able to tell they are stripes. 19:45, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck and also on the upper back area. 22:19, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:13, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Clovertail (E) ~ For Approval
16:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading a bit?

Still working?Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  20:50, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and lighten the neck a bit! Good work!TawnyBracken (talk) 04:11, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

reuploaded why would i lighten it when it's the same as the rest of the shading 20:06, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Cloudmist (W) - For Approval
will eventually tweak shading I think. All colors from apprentice file.

I know you said you might tweak the shading, but can you make the tail shading less lumpy (there's basically just a part in the middle that's not as shaded as the top and bottom), and try to define light/shade on the legs as you do that? Lovely white kitteh

Re-uploaded.

Define the earpink a little bit! :) 17:17, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Softwing (Star) ~ Withdrawn
I kinda like how I did the shading. ^^ Comments? 22:19, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more and darken the shading a bit :D 22:35, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups  23:10, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail where it meets the rest of the body. And get rid of the white line around the eye. 05:20, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

 Re-ups   11:05, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

There should be some shading at the bottom of her body :3

The patch placement doesn't seem to quite match - her queen shows that the tail patch is larger, and the back patch is a bit bigger

 Re-ups   21:42, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

The lineart looks blurred. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  22:59, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

 Re-ups  I fixed some lineart that was blurred near the ear. Is there anymore? 23:14, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the ---> ear pink. 04:56, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

 Re-ups   11:42, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

lighten and thin out the tail shading. 16:25, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

 Re-ups   20:19, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

there's waste around the image 01:01, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Any certain spots? Or is it everywhere? 14:06, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:24, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

I think a bit of the ---> ear pink is leaking out. 22:46, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups 22:54, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like more depth could be added to the flank shading. 03:14, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

 Re-ups   11:31, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Nice image, but I think that the shading at the base of the tail should be switched from the left side to the right side, if the light is coming from <--- side as it appears to be. 21:51, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Withdrawing. X ) 22:13, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Redclaw (Star) ~ For Approval
meh  <span style="">01:20 Tue Jan 10 

The earpink looks a bit different than the other image. Nice pattern! :D 02:13, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

holy crap this is awesome It could be my screen, but I'm seeing the shading to be... light green that it's kinda odd? Maybe shift the tint or darken it a tad?

Reups Yea that's cus it is green shading. I darkened it some, but if you want me to change the tint I can. green shading on a red cat probably wasnt my brightest idea lmao (but thanks)    <span style="">20:15 Tue Jan 10 

I think the tint is fine. Mind smudging the ---> ear pink a bit? 05:20, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Stagleap (TR) (Star) - For approval
Hello heavy texture <33 <span style="">19:51 Tue Jan 10

Gorgeous. Define the light on the tail a bit. 04:58, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is as much as I'm able to define it. <span style="">16:55 Wed Jan 11

Lighten the shading a bit? I have nothing else to say about this other then 'This is AMAZING!' Good work!!TawnyBracken (talk) 03:31, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Thank you ^^ But can I get a second opinion on the shading opacity? I'm only asking because this isn't any darker than his other images. <span style="">15:54 Fri Jan 13

I think it's fine personally. Like you said, it's similar to his other images. 16:04, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Thistleheart (Star) ~ For Approval
20:57, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten and smudge the shading in the direction of fur on the body instead of...every direction if you know what I mean? I thought this was a gray and white for a second =P

Recede/erase away some of the shading on the face, it feels like there's too much of it in shadow based on how much light is on the back. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 04:52, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:54, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Amazing! Alot better then I could do...lighten the shading a bit, looks gray on the flank and paws a tiny bitTawnyBracken (talk) 00:32, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Thanks! 13:30, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Stormheart (W) ~ For Approval
First warrior. Meh - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  20:48, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the gray a tad. She's looking like a ginger and white. <span style="">21:02 Wed Jan 11

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  22:25, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading 01:02, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

The gray base is #CFCFCF, and the ginger base is #C6730A. It looks how it does due to the reddish tint that I have for the patches on the kit. The stripes are also smudged, not blurred, although that's extremely difficult to see here. Also shorten the tail patch, as it's only meant to be about halfway. Also blur the edges of the ginger a bit, as they're also that way on the kit. Define the ear pink as well.

Smooth out the stripes definitely and fix the shading on the arm, looks like a blotch.TawnyBracken (talk) 00:33, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Wetfoot (Star) ~ For Evaluation
Comments? XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 02:39, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Add texture and make the stripes next to the eyes thinner. And blur/smudge the shading more on the flank and chest. 02:44, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

ReDone :) XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 02:49, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the belly, right next to the --> leg, as well as some other places. (Leaking away from the lineart means it gets lighter near the lineart) 03:05, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the flank a bit? Other then that the eyes and markings are amazing!!TawnyBracken (talk) 03:08, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Define/sharpen the stripes 03:10, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

 Redone  Srry, could only do Cinder's criticism. I will fix the rest tommorow. X) XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 03:14, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

 Redone  XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 11:32, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the stripes/spots and extend the stripes to meet the edges of the body. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  19:59, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

 Redone  XxxTheMaplexxX (talk) 20:18, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (Star) ~ For Approval
Hey, should I put up a request for a mentor on the talk page? I want to. Comments? 22:36, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think the base color could be darker to better match the others. 22:45, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light source and texture. I can't distinguish either. Check the tutorials page for guidance on the light source if you need it. <span style="">23:24 Fri Jan 13

Fix the shading and darken the brown to fit the other versions.TawnyBracken (talk) 00:12, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Redone 01:44, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred to match his other images. 02:23, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I am so sorry guys. ;-;. Just can't find the 'right one'. T-T 02:27, January 14, 2017 (UTC)