Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 13

Heatherstar (L) - Redone
Here eye's kinda creep me out... Anyway, first leader charart up and ever since I first saw her's the highlight's have just been really bothering me. Redid the charart because the shading proved to be a real pain in the tail. Anyway, comments? 23:22, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make her eyes like they were. Make the nose a gray color since she was described as being gray (I think). Blur the shading a little more. (it's so much easier when the changes show to critique >~<) 23:25, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, make the earpink fill the ear to the line. Otherwise it's always gonna be small. 23:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Forgot to erase the waste around the head, I'll get rid of it later. @Ivy, she was described as pinkish-gray but I gave her a gray nose anyway. 23:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Dull the highlights a little, especially the chest and haunch. Also, blur the tail higlight. Shadewing  Blades of the Night 00:19, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

@Shadewing. I think you're looking at the wrong one. The changes aren't showing up now. 01:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry! xC Shadewing  Blades of the Night  01:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There's some waste around the head; delete those, and blur the shaidng more. Great job! 20:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are very blotchy. Make them smoother and move them upwards. 01:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Move the highlights on the tail more towards the middle.  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER The Peace is Perfect☯  03:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the left earpink bigger, they look kind of uneven. 16:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The light source doesn't seem very consistent. Move the chest highlight over a bit maybe? I don't know, it just seems kinda off. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:55, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Waste wrong the charart 04:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, what are you talking about? Please, explain what you mean. 15:56, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, wrong version. Please look into the history to make sure. And I do think she meant there's just waste around the charart, but for future reference please use correct sentence structure, ok? Can you make the eyes like an approved leader? I think the pupils reach down too far and cat's pupils usually aren't as long as their eye. 17:18, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Wow, I have been meaning to re-upload this for so long.... 20:06, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours, approved 23:12, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Runningstorm (K) ~ Redone
Redone as *shorthair, and to match other pixels. Since I did Runningstorm's warrior, might as well do his kit, eh? OA was Dawnfeather I believe. You know where to find the changes :P 00:12, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think you mean shorthair....xD brighten the earpink. Sky- Killer of Daleks 00:16, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Derp, *shorthair. Thanks x) 00:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the light part on the chest. Very nice! 01:38, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white part, pinken the earpink, and darken the shading. Good job! 20:34, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :) You know where to find the changes :D 22:05, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur the chest; it looks a bit blotchy. Nice work! 22:57, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks :D 04:37, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Very cute! The lighter chest looks like it's going off to the side a bit, though. 23:43, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! And the changes are in it's normal slot :3 18:36, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours, approved. 23:12, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Pine(TS) (R)- Tweaked
Here, he is....i got bored with Pebblefoot.....so i withdrew him, and here is Pine, i just gave him battle-scars. *OA was Brambleclaw14 Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:23, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cool scars. the pairs on his throat look akward. make some longer & shorter -- 02:24, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erase one scar on the haunch and make the pair further apart. Add depth to the eye. 02:26, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:30, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to add the OA, i feel so smart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:47, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit so it's not so candy-floss-pink, and sharpen the ends of the scars.  ❀ wild  heart ❀    03:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- At LAST, i hated the color of the ear-pink, and I did, it is because the are blurred so much it looks that way.I took the ear-pink clor from Cloudtail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Remove one scar from the chest. 14:30, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Aww but i LIKE his scars xD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:34, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

xD Make the two scars on the chest further apart, please. 15:56, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

24 hours, approved. 23:12, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hutch (KP) - Redone
Here's Hutch. OA was Ashshadow, and it needed to be lightened, but when I tried to lighten it, it looked kind of green, and I couldn't properly adjust the saturation to make it a normal shade of brown again. The stripes were kind of unrealistic to begin with. Comments?  ❀ wild  heart ❀    02:52, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, i'm not sure if it will be declined or not..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:53, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine. I'm archiving one of them anyways. It stays. Wonderful work, Wildheart! I missed looking at your chararts. =) 02:55, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then, i did to, define the shading a bit. so good to see you again :) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:56, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aw, thanks, guys :3 I didn't know what you mean, Maplepool, so I darkened the shading instead.  ❀ wild  heart ❀    03:05, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

That is what define is anyway :P Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:17, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Woah, awesome job!! Pinken the earpink -- 02:44, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, Bloo :3 <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> ❀ wild  <span style="font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;"> heart ❀    03:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! All I see is that you need to add depth to the eye. 14:29, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, cute! Make the nose stand out a little more from the pelt. 15:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 <span style="background:#EAFAE8; color: #3DD5FF; font-family:Consolas,Monaco,'Bitstream Vera Sans Mono','Nimbus Mono L',monospace;">05:36 Sep 25 Sun

24 hours, approved 23:12, September 26, 2011 (UTC)