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Stoneclaw (W) ~ For Approval
Trying this with GIMP. -- 23:09, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink?Broken_Foot

Define the shading on the tail 23:11, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Base color doesn't seem to match other images

Smooth out the blotchy parts of the shading on the back and neck, and define the shading on the paws and the haunch. 23:15, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Why are the legs farthest from us lighter than the rest of the body? 23:31, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I colorpicked from the StarClan image and checked again and it is the right base color. And in my reupload I couldn't seem to get rid of the waste so can somebody who knows GIMP tell me how? -- 23:38, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Not to state the obvious, but there's lots of waste around the whole thingBroken_Foot

Well for GIMP, go to your lineart layer, fill the outside of the lineart in red, and then use the color select tool to select the red. Then, erase the red, then go to your shading layer and erase the waste there (make your brush super big, for it to get it all). It works on any layer, actually. Also, define the light. This really does look darker than the star, unless you picked from an area that was shaded on it.

There's leaking shading along the back and a bit on the hind leg closest to us. Also, define the shading on the tail, and the light on the front legs. 23:52, March 31, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little 00:23, 4/01/2017

Reups --  00:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

There's a lot of gaps in the earpink--can you fix that? 00:52 4/1/17 (UTC)

Reups --  01:29, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur the lighting (if the lighter parts on the <-- side are lighting, I'm tired) and earpink and possibly match the eye color a bit better? 01:50, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink some more and define the shading and shading depth some more. ~Patch   feather~   13:27, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  15:47, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading around the head and hind legs a little and smooth it out. ~Patch   feather~   16:46, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  17:05, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back paws and near the flank and define the light on the front legs. ~Patch   feather~   18:13, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

So this are the main colors I used for the StarClan image; the base color is 757575, then for the shading mainly 454545, for earpink A59090. 18:24, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks for the colors! c: --  20:43, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

smooth the lighting more 22:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

The eye colour is still quite different. 23:07, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:28, April 1, 2017 (UTC)

Make the lineart black. 03:34, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reups --  15:22, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there's still color leaking onto the lineart 17:51, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

I tried..but I don't know how to fix that. --  18:24, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Try just replacing the lineart layer; some parts look dark gray. Overlapping the lineart layer should fix any problems like that. Also, smooth the paler parts, because this image shouldn't have any, and it kinda looks like it does. Besides that, define the light on both front legs and round out the shading on the rump.

Reups I tried to replace the lineart but that one turned dark gray too. I know it's because of the shading but I don't know how to stop the shading from coloring the lineart. ._. --  18:39, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

The layer with your lineart should be the topmost layer, or second topmost depending on how you do your eyes and stuff. Basically, the lineart should be above the base pelt, shading, highlights, ect.

Reups I tried to erase some of the color on the lineart. --  18:47, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit 20:49, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  21:54, April 2, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and smooth it out.

Reups Now I have a feeling it's too dark :c --  01:58, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Fox, you need to really smooth out the shading everywhere.Broken_Foot

Shading's also leaking away from the lineart a little bit on the foreleg closest to us and on his underbelly (unless the underbelly was intentional?). 20:50, April 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading depth. 02:38, April 5, 2017 (UTC)

where's his pupil? 19:02, 4/06/2017

Still working?

His pupil is on the left side of his eye. --  23:06, April 7, 2017 (UTC)


 * No, there needs to be a pupil visible in the eye. Look at some other warrior images for reference. The eye is just the blank model for the warrior image. 15:22, 4/08/2017

Eye style is artist's choice. I can see it and I know it's there. It's fine, and you're being picky. I've even made warrior images with eyes like this in the past.

Reups --  20:04, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading overall, I really can hardly make it out. 23:51, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  23:59, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs 00:01, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit imo

Reups --  00:17, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's gray leaking all over the lineart, please make sure it's black. I also think you could define shading depth, and maybe lighten the shading on the legs, it looks like his legs are darker than the rest of his body 00:36, April 10, 2017 (UTC)


 * Make sure what's black; the shading? Shading tint is artist's choice. Also no to the lightening the shading on the legs, get rid of some of the shading on the legs, to define the light source. Define the shading everywhere else as well. 02:01, 4/10/2017


 * I am sure Snow meant making the lineart black since there is some gray leaking over it. 02:18, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, that was definitely a comment about the lineart, Winter. Also, I'm going to disagree with your comment about lightening the shading. Even if Foxey gets rid of some of the shading, it's still going to be a tad bit darker, so lightening the shading wouldn't hurt in the least.

Reups --  23:00, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and shading depth. 13:47, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:13, April 11, 2017 (UTC)

The shading along the back appears to be leaking away from the lineart. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:02, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's still a little gray leaking onto the lineart, particularly on the rump and base of the tail, and could you smooth out the tail shading a bit, there are some lighter hard edged pixels towards the top of it 18:30, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:43, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth overall, an define the shading on the face some.

Reups Redid a few things.. --  14:19, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the flank and back legs maybe? 17:15, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reups The feel when you accidentally delete the xcf file...yeah I had to redo it :c --  20:13, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth of the shading? This looks great! 20:17, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks. ^^ --  21:07, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and legs, and also define the shading depth.

Reups --  13:47, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more still, and define the shading on the tail some more. Define the shading depth as well, and there might be some leaking shading on the back leg farthest from us 20:21, 4/17/2017

There's still a pale part on the haunch 17:21, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

You can refer for the tutorials for more information on shading.

Reups --  16:55, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, and define the light on the front legs and tail

Does shading depth mean darker? --  22:12, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Not necessarily, though some people do just darken it. What it means is to make the shading more of a gradient - darker where the light is furthest from, and slowly getting lighter as the light hits it more. Here, it looks the same shading shade most of the way across, instead of fading in/out

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
Shading is annoying. ErmineGlow (talk) 16:39, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed out and define the dark splotch on her ear?Broken_Foot

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 17:52, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth shading some more and define it on the legs? 19:36, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:41, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little more, define the light on the legs and tail. 20:19, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:42, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little. Also, I think the belly shading should extend further ---> way, towards where the haunch overlaps the underbelly. 22:24, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a bit? 23:40, April 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you move the splotch more on the ear and define it? It kind of blends in with the shading on the side of the head 01:10, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 15:54, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on both front legs and the back one farthest from us, and smooth out the shading a bit? 17:41, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's a little piece on the belly near the hips where the shading is missing. 22:47, April 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the belly and a little way above the base of the tail 00:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit dark.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:10, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the <-- front leg near the lineart. 14:18, April 9, 2017 (UTC)

The waste is still there :/ and I think shading could be lightened and smoothed some more  15:06, April 9, 2017 (UTC)


 * The shading darkness is fine, Snow. But I do agree on the smoothing of it 02:05, 4/10/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

Not to be rude, but I cannot tell the difference between each of your uploads. I noticed only little to no change to your image. Excuse me if I come off rude, but I really can't tell the differenceBroken_Foot

Smooth the shading.

Just thought I'd point out that the waste is still there- right below the belly, and a little at the top of the image above the tail 23:59, April 10, 2017 (UTC)

There's a reddish marking on the lower part of the belly that I don't think is supposed to be there. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:10, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:46, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste around the whole image 22:34, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I'm pretty sure all the waste is gone now. ErmineGlow (talk) 12:35, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still waste around the muzzle and tailtip 13:36, 4/14/2017

I think there's still waste around the <-- paw closest to us too.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:04, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail 21:21, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 19:34, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the splotch on the ear? It's looking a little hard-edged. 19:45, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and expand it on the face. Also, maybe slightly expand the flank shading.

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 18:06, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more, I can't hardly make it out. As well as defining the shading depth, and add some more light on the front legs 20:23, 4/17/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:42, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more 01:20, 4/19/2017

Reups Egg salad ErmineGlow (talk) 02:44, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking almost everywhere and still needs to be smoothed out. 02:46, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:16, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups again noticed some waste ErmineGlow (talk) 14:19, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

There's still waste all around the image Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:28, April 22, 2017 (UTC)chat

Reups I think that the waste is gone now. ErmineGlow (talk) 14:33, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

The shading could still be smoothed out a lot

The base colour looks reddish? 19:38, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Parsleyseed (KP) - CBA
I'm so unbelievably proud of how this turned out tbh. (also, was very anxious of someone reserving this before I could get to it) 17:21, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I know the feeling, snek. Define shading on face?

reups 17:31, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I believe on the other images there's some creamy parts above the eyes. Looking good! 19:06, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups 19:26, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I'm fairly sure that there's some paler parts (only slightly paler, mind you) not he front legs, underbelly, back two paws, and underside of the tail. They appear on both images in the same spots, so I'm pretty sure it's that and not a highlight

his other images look a lot lighter than this. 19:47, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I already had paler parts and most of the ones you mention wouldn't be visible, spooky. Also, I colorpicked from the apprentice image, so it's the same colors. 19:48, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

colourpick doesn't mean the colours are totally accurate. he's too dark, and I even have the file foe the apprentice, if you want it. 19:50, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

reups I tried colorpicking from a lighter part of the image, is this okay? 20:02, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like the muzzle should have more pale parts as well as the eyes. 20:44, 4/15/2017

reups The eyes match the other images just fine, but I defined the cream a bit anyways. The muzzle matched the warrior, but I changed it to better fit the apprentice image. 21:15, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the secondary pale parts on the haunch. On the warrior, you can see how it goes from a pale part, to another shade, then to the base color. It's on the apprentice too, just less visible because of that shading source. Also, define them on the belly ad well. The warrior shows them to stretch out quite a bit, so even though the belly doesn't show much on this blank, there would still be some.

reups 23:50, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

The colors still seem a bit off.. why not just get the file with the actual colors instead of colorpicking? Jayie's shading method almost always has tinted shading, and she also uses highlights, which is bound to throw off the colors, even with the lighter areas.

reups Everything is now the exact same hex code as the apprentice, plus I added some highlights to better match the apprentice. (I actually had to redo this, my computer shut down for an update before I could save :^)))) 22:57, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more 20:27, 4/17/2017

reups 22:28, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the facial color not match the rest of his image? 00:11, 4/18/2017

Its the exact same color, Winter 00:37, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

I hate to be that guy but it honestly is still too dark. I've provided you with a picture of what the differences are (excuse the poor mouse handwriting). The face color is a different color than the rest of the body, and it appears as if there's random pale parts on the back and shoulder. You need more stripes on the face. Define the ear fur a little more, and I believe your stripes are a bit too thick. The tail also should not have a pale part on it, as the apprentice image came first. The pale underbelly should not go that far up on his chest/belly area, and the stripes need to be smudged. Sorry in advance for wall of text 01:33, 4/19/2017

Scratch the stripe thickness part 01:35, 4/19/2017

Winter, while I'll fix most of the above things, I will literally send you the files of both the KP and the App. I colorpicked from the base color layer. I also colorpicked from the stripes layer. Also, the random pale parts are highlights, but I'll fix those up no problem. Also, I was told earlier to show the pale belly, but I'll recede it I guess. 01:46, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

I can send the original file for the warrior and/or apprentice if you need them. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 01:51, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Another thing, Winter, I have the exact same amount of stripes here as the other images. They have the ones leading from the eyes, and the few head stripes, but there's no others. 01:57, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

reups I didn't remove the pale tail since Jayie said it was there. 03:52, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

reups again added some small cream parts that I missed. 02:55, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 19:45, 4/23/2017

Beechfur (TC) (W) - For Approval
I'm really proud with this one! 18:46, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

I'll try to fix the cut of nose later. 18:47, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

The blank isn't quite the right size - it's smaller all around by a bit.

The shading could be smoothed out. Shyaw, if you need any help with the Charart and their size, you have to go to the Charart page, click on the file of the blank, and at the top near the name, there is a button to press that should say 'see full size image' And then right click when its open, and save it! <span style="">18:51, 4/15/2017

The lineart is blurred. ErmineGlow (talk) 19:07, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Broken, you are truly magical. Thank you so much! The weird pixels that I was having trouble with on Icewing are gone if I do that! Now I know what you guys meant by saving the file wrong! 19:13, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you! And your welcome :D Smooth out the shading? If you need help with smoothing out the shading, click on the blur tool, go to the bottom of the tool options, and there should be a checkbox named 'hard edge' and click on the box. And then put the rate to 100. The rate box should be at the bottom and you could adjust to whatever you think if right for you! <span style="">19:20, 4/15/2017

There's waste a little ways out by the --> side on the tail, near the tip. 19:23, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Oh, and could you smudge the earpink a bit? 19:27, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't find the waste, but I tried removing it anyways. :) 19:43, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Round out the shoulder-ish area shading to the curve of the body, as it makes a pretty distinct angle as of now. Also, smooth out the shading just a bit more, for a gradient.

Reuploaded 20:05, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if you need these but the colors I used were, for the base 1c1100, for shading 0d0700 and 080400 (this one for darker parts), and ear pink 844f4f mainly. – ' •   Water ' ' • ' 20:10, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Water! I checked them and the base and shading are good, but I'm not sure the ear pink looks right. 20:20, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the eye sparkle (the white eye pixel)? Unless it's just me, I can't see it. Also, smooth out the shading again, as I'm not seeing much of a difference from last time.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is good! 22:51, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a bit?

Reuploaded 16:16, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry I sound like a broken record but, smooth out the shading again? It should fade to the base more, and it still isn't much of a gradient.

Reuploaded :) 23:20, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the depth of the shading 01:31, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:30, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define where the pupil is? It looks like the normal blank blank in regards to the eye <span style="">20:30, 4/17/2017

Reuploaded 22:58, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Mind defining the light on the hind legs? 23:18, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on both legs farthest from us and smooth out the earpink? Very nice! 00:52, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could be smoothed some more

Reuploaded Thanks! :) 01:17, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Did you smooth the shading? Not trying to be rude, but I don't see any difference

Reuploaded 02:01, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Just noticed there's some green from the eye leaking onto the fur, and it looks like there's some shading on <-- side of the tail that should be removed

Reuploaded 02:41, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more

Reuploaded 23:03, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more, particularly in the neck and chest area. 20:16, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:35, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smoothed out the shading more. 01:10, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the shading that's on the front of the leg by the base of the chest? <span style="">19:46, 4/23/2017

Mumblefoot (D) ~ For Approval
Yikes I don't know how to shade

Smooth out shading, and define it on the tail. 03:03, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and define the shading on the front legs 03:04, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

And Starlight, don't forget your sig :P 03:04, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

Sure you know how to shade; it looks good to me, although I do agree with Starlight. Also, just in case anyone tries to tell you otherwise, since the cite for mangy and graying is from when he was depicted as an elder, he won't need these on this charart.

There's a stray white pixel on the <--- side of the chest. Nice! 03:08, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

I actually think the back <-- leg needs some more shading.

I see waste around the entire image.

Reuploaded Oh geez I need to reupload again, btw can someone tell me how I can define light?

You erase on the shading layer. Hope that helped. ^^

Reuploaded Hmm I think I addressed every comment

That's not the only way to define light, Snowfall; you can also add another layer that has lighter areas, often just a white or a lighter color of the base.

The eye seems more brown than orange. 03:48, April 16, 2017 (UTC)

I agree but I have to match the first image and these colors were colorpicked from the elder, and thanks for explaining how to define light

I have the file for the warrior if you ever need it Snow :3 <span style="">04:13, 4/16/2017

Given that the colors (for the eyes) for the elder are limited, you are welcome to pick from the StarClan image if you need or want more variety. As long as they match closely enough, that's all that matters.

This actually looks a little too light in color <span style="">04:23, 4/16/2017

Reuploaded I colorpicked from a darker spot on the elder (and fixed eye color)

Who could have guessed he would have once been deputy? Here's the hex code for the brown, which I colorpicked from the warrior 5c4135 <span style="">06:49, 4/16/2017

Smooth the shading a bit more and possibly expand it a little? <span style="">20:31, 4/17/2017

Define eye depth?

Reuploaded I can't define the eye depth anymore than it is, but I did move the darker colors to the top and the lighter colors to the bottom (Does anyone know why the eye color was orange before I uploaded it but after it was uploaded it looks brown?)

Amber is a shade of brown. It's brownish-ginger. Also define the light on the legs <span style="">00:12, 4/18/2017

Reuploaded That didn't answer my question, I know what amber is. But nevermind, the eye color looks normal on my phone, just not on my computer

I do believe, that this source would shed at least a tiny bit of light on the <-- side of the back leg furthest away from us. Also, define the shading depth on the --> front leg and the <-- back leg.

Reuploaded I fooled around a little bit with the opacity and depth and I'm not sure if changes are showing so let me know if I need to define depth more

Reuploaded Got rid of waste and defined depth on front legs

Maybe there could be shading on the head?

Reuploaded There already was but I defined it

Define it a fair bit more; I can't even see it's there.

Reuploaded It's such a tiny spot on the head I don't think it's supposed to be that noticeable

Can you define the shading depth on the back of the head, nearer to the middle? With this source, it should be a bit more noticeable imo.

Reuploaded Yup, looks better :D

Can you add more shading behind the elbow on the tummy? <span style="">15:25, 4/21/2017

Define the shading depth on the front legs

Reuploaded I didn't add shading behind the elbow since I was following the shading placement from the apprentice tutorials

Can you smooth the shading more on the main body area? <span style="">19:47, 4/23/2017

Reedwhisker (Rogue) ~ For Approval
//flops in with wet cat clan deputy "WET CATS BEST CATS" //flops out --

Smooth out the shading? Welcome back! <span style="">01:12, 4/19/2017

Re-uploaded I don't know if it helped that much but yay, wet rogue cat has a new version

Smooth out the shading more, and define it as well.

I feel like it should be expanded a bit <span style="">04:17, 4/19/2017

Eye should be blue. 05:06, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded wonder why his other pixels had gray eyes, also tried to turn his black shading a bit bluish --

Smooth out the shading?

I've blurred it at rate 100 for a bit, how am I supposed to blur it further? Also, where exactly should I smooth it out? --

I think it can be smoothed everywhere, you could try using the blur tool at hard edge, plus having it at rate 100. 01:58, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --

The sahding looks a bit hard-edged on the hind leg closest to us. Mind smoothing it out? 03:04, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure if it worked. --

Can you define the shading more? I can't make it out <span style="">19:48, 4/23/2017

Mistpelt (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
Gameboy22 (talk)gameboy22

(For Gameboy22) Remove the white background, define ear pink, shading and texture, and the eye needs to be green. Also, please put the correct heading Mistpelt (W) ~ For Evaluation. You also need to reserve this on the chart. 17:44, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

Did you colorpick? It looks darker than the actual image.

Define the eye depth, and add shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 20:58, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

That was already said, so don't repeat comments.

You can check out the tutorials for some advice on shading.

Still working? <span style="">19:48, 4/23/2017

Amberclaw (Star) ~ CBA
-cringes- rip shading and eye color 00:07, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading and eye depth. Also, can you make the stripes on the forehead a bit thicker to match the other images? And is the nose filled in? 00:11, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

I think they're thick enough, but it is an approval page. Define the earpink, and the shading on the tail? Also, the nose is filled in <span style="">00:15, 4/20/2017

reups 00:40, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading pretty much everywhere besides the tail, quite a bite. 00:42, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste near the ear and front paws 00:55, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

reups shading seems a lil dark but I dunno and I think I got rid of the waste 00:58, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth more ErmineGlow (talk) 01:17, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could be expanded on the belly.

I think there would be a little shading behind the <-- arm (I rlly hope you know where I'm talking about)  also define shading depth a little

This is beautiful! I would smudge/blur the shading on the ear a little. 16:32, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pupil slightly - I can see it, but it's a little hard to make out

i dunno if I can still make comments since I'm technically no longer in PCA anymore but could you smooth out -> earpink a bit? 20:23, 4/20/2017

reups the belly shading. yikes. 21:17, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

The belly shading could really be expanded and the shading could use some smoothing out.

This can be for approval, since you seem to know what you're doing. :) <span style="">15:29, 4/21/2017

reupz ^aH yay ! 23:25, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth and smooth it out everywhere but the flank. 06:33, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

reups 13:56, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's still some waste near the ---> ear. 15:32, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the stripes just a touch, as they seem darker on the other images. Also, define the shading depth

reups 17:16, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:48, 4/23/2017

Shinecloud (Star) - CBA
04:28, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's just me but I don't think the base looks sand-colored, it kinda just looks white imo

Sand can come in a range of colors, including almost white.

Define the shading depth just a tiiiiiny bit? Purdy <3333 <span style="">05:56, 4/21/2017

I love that heart on her head. Smoothen out the tail shading? 06:32, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:40, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Correct me if I am wrong, but make the tail bushy? If we had to do it for Rosetail, wouldn't this be the same since she was stated to have a bushy tail? <span style="">15:05 Fri Apr 21

Define eye depth?

Sun, she was not named for her tail, so it stays as is. Smooth out the shading some more <span style="">15:31, 4/21/2017

Re-uploaded 18:32, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 15:51, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:17, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Shanty (KP) - For Approval
Making this was actually kind of theraputic... <span style="">22:04 Fri Apr 21

Shanty is so cute! Love this^ Define the shading just a small bit? <span style="">22:16, 4/21/2017

Darn! I had my eye on her. Smudge the ear pink a tad? 22:18, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded She is such an amazing feel-good character (at least for me)! I'm shocked no one did her art yet lol <span style="">22:29 Fri Apr 21

Smoothen out the shading on the lower half of the cat. Also, the ear pink looks almost white, could you possibly make it a bit more pink? C: 22:43, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded The earpink is taking up almost all of the ear. It just happens to be that the white ear fluff is what is mostly out of the shading. <span style="">14:14 Sat Apr 22

Define the shading depth on the little belly part? If that makes sense 15:50, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Fenneldust (DF) ~ CBA
here's some bad attempt at emulating the pattern of a king cheetah 22:19, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

<3 Amazing!! Is there any white hairs on the muzzle? I like this alot! <span style="">22:21, 4/21/2017

Is that shading on the forehead? If so, smooth it out. 22:58, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded they're there, but the muzzle isn't particulary big on this one 16:03, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Antpelt (Ki) ~ CBA
I wanted to try something simple since I'm super busy this week. Comments? 22:44, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

This doesn't look like it matches the other images, ignore me if it's just me. Anyways, smooth the shading? 22:45, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like it matches, but on the ear on <--- isn't the black supposed to cover the whole ear, not just the inside where the earpink is? <span style="">22:54, 4/21/2017

I can't see the earpink on the right ear. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:56, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the black a bit more. 22:57, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

^Well, the base color actually really does look brighter than the df especially, so perhaps check that again for matching purposes.

Reups Whoops. I thought the warrior was the first in the set. Now everything matches. @Broken, many kit images have the ear covered. Beenose and Apple Blossom are some I can think of off the top of my head. 23:26, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the right ear again ErmineGlow (talk) 14:17, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 15:25, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure how to describe it without totally confusing you, but the black on <-- ear. Isn't that supposed to cover the whole ear? Like on Antpelt's Dark Forest, it covers his whole ear, but on this one, it only covers the inside of the ear and not the outside. I'll redline it and leave a link to it on your talk page if you still have no clue what I mean. Great job either way^^(Here's the hex code for the brown which I colorpicked off the df too:8b4300 <span style="">18:39, 4/22/2017

Reups After staring at this for like 10 minutes, I think I understood what you were saying. And thanks. ^^ 19:11, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink on the brown ear? 16:14, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 16:42, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:49, 4/23/2017

Ferris (KP) - CBA
00:49, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Looking good! Mind cropping the image? 01:21, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think these images need cropping <span style="">12:26, 4/22/2017

Re-uploaded. Actually, there was a lot of unneeded space on <--- side of the image so I did crop it, and also messed around with some other things. 12:56, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little? It sort of blends in with the color 15:49, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried. 16:19, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Mocha (KP) ~ CBA
01:27, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful job on this one! Your StarClan cats are my favorite <3 Smooth out the shading on the bottom of the back leg on ---> side? If you have no clue what I mean, I'll try to describe it the best I can xd <span style="">18:40, 4/22/2017

Reupload Thanks Broken! I hope I got the place you meant. 19:51, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">19:50, 4/23/2017

Smoke (Q) ~ CBA
eh.

Define the shading depth on the face 15:18, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? <span style="">19:50, 4/23/2017

Morning Fire (A) - For Approval
Colors were picked from her kit. 16:49, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Am I beng a dumb-dumb, or is this supposed to have texture? <span style="">18:49, 4/22/2017


 * There is no texture on the kit? 19:28, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the kit does have some texture. 19:42, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the belly. <span style="">19:51, 4/23/2017

Mossyfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
*Cringes at attempt to texture*

Smooth out the shading and define the texture a small bit. Looks nice! <span style="">22:13, 4/22/2017

the white has texture too. 22:38, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

re-up There was texture on the white, it was just too light. *Cringes at the rhyme.*

Smooth out the shading a bit more.

There's shading leaking on the belly near the <--- front leg 16:06, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Skunkpaw (Star) ~ For Approval
22:57, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Wow that looks good! Define shading?

Brighten the white a tad?

Oatwhisker (TC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Haven't done a StarClan cat for a while, and he seemed simple enough. Also, I am aware the shading may need to be smoothed out and lightened just a small bit. Soooo comments? <span style="">16:18, 4/23/2017

Define the earpink a bit 16:24, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Didn't really know how to do that, but I lessened the shading on the ear a bit and lightened it a few ticks too <span style="">16:30, 4/23/2017

Maybe lighten the shading a tad? Also, he looks a little cross-eyed. 16:46, April 23, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! StarClan willing not the pupil stuff again xD And before anyone says to lighten the shading again, that is not shading-the darker parts-that is the shading depth and I will lighten it the best of my ability <span style="">16:59, 4/23/2017

Define the earpink in the <-- ear, and also lighten the shading some.

Re-uploaded! Tried colorpicking from a lighter area, but I don't know how to 'define the earpink' that well <span style="">18:23, 4/23/2017