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Piketooth (W) ~ Redone
Okay I know this didn't look like it needed to be redone but the lineart was smudged and I couldn't fix it, so here he is, OA was Maplepool, I suck at tabbies but I tried and I think it turned out ok, if you disagree that this needed to be redone tell me and I'll just use the other one and add the tooth. 19:15, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

I love this! You did everything on this? You got skill! Tone down and blur the highlights. 19:23 Sat Dec 17

The changes aren't showing click on it and look at the first one on the list. That's the one I did. 19:51, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't Piketooth have protruding canine teeth? Should that be added? Bluestar11796 20:54, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

It is added. The changes aren't showing, remember? Look at the image details. 20:55 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded I moved the tooth up I think the changes are showing now. 21:02, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, yes, now they are. Add some stripes to the top of his head and his ear. Good job. 21:03 Sat Dec 17

Reuploaded 21:36, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least you kept my Tabby style. I liked that style, rather fond of it. Looks good, define the hoighlights, i cant see them. Lovely by the way! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

That's because there aren't any highlights, and yeah I liked that style too. 22:46, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. ^^ Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 00:21, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Wild, you need to get permission, no matter whether you think the image needs to be redone or not. Looks at the top, it says your image will be declined if you don't. However, I've asked to redo this one before and gotten a yes (though I never got around to doing it) so this should be fine, but just for future reference, always ask unless it's on the tweak nominations page listed as a redo. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:25, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry Paleclaw, I'll ask next time. 22:24, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, just telling you for future reference. Anyways, make the color a bit less green. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:37, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Green? 00:54, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

It looks tinted green. That tends to happen a lot with browns. Just move it farther from the yellow on the color wheal/bar thing, and closer to the red. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

He doesn't look green,he looks brown. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:54, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

He looks brown to me too. ^^ Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 06:56, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Idrk about the brown-green issue, but make the tooth kinda off-white, as a wild cat is unlikely to have a perfectly white tooth :3 10:18 Wed Dec 21

Please read the message I left on Whitewing's charart section, please dont take this, I'm going to work on it ASAP 17:41, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brook (Alt W)- Tweaked
She needed a torn ear and her eyes should be grey, unless they were described amber or whatever. OA is Mistystar 139. I think. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 00:45, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

She was described with amber eyes, so add that back. 01:36, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My mistake. ^^ Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 01:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights don't make sense, unless the sun is underneath her...can you fix that? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:52, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The sun could be in front of her maybe... Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 23:48, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, Sky, I think you should redo this :3 I'm not the leader or deputy, but this is practically plum coloured, the shading doesn't make any sense, and the earpink is way too big and not the right colour. I'd put it on the redo list, and just redo it. You could ask Iceheart or Scarlet for formal affirmation, but this really does need to be redone :P 10:20 Wed Dec 21

^ I think the ok from two leads should suffice. Go ahead and redo it, knock yourself out. 17:08, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, I agree, redo. When you do, could you make the torn ear match the PH and queen images better? It's more of a V on there. I know this matches the warrior version exactly, but in my opinion, that one doesn't match her other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:21, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry it took so long. Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 05:03, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, don't be, this one looks way better! Changes aren't showing, btw, check the history, and blur the highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:04, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 07:57, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make this gray-brown, as opposed to grayish :3 <span style="">08:10 Sun Dec 25

I took the colour off Bird's charart, just made it a weenie bit greyer. But I should still change it? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 08:32, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think so. And thicken the lineart on the ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:04, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste by her head and torn ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 11:20, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ALright, how bout now? :3 <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:45, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Braveheart (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar12, redone with permission by Scarletwind; unrealistic tabby stripes. Comments? 00:13, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, and the stripes look painted on after the shading, could you darken the areas of the stripes in the shading? 01:07, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I did the stripes before the shading, but I defined the shading on them anyway. 01:11, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes to the legs? 02:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I like how you did this one ^^ Darken the shading a couple percent. <span style="">08:04 Wed Dec 21

Pretty ^^ Can you dull the earpink a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this, Misty? 19:17, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (W) - Redone
I have permission to redo. His description sad he has 'Tiger-stripes' and his old ones were nothing like a tiger's. These were copied directly off a tiger photo, so I don't wanna hear anything about them not looking like a tiger. OA was Bramble then tweak by Rainey. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:48, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

No offense to Bramble or Rainey, but i like this one FAR better than the other one. can you make his eyes more orangey? They look pale yellow, not amber. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:58, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, the top part of the torn ear looks rectangular. Make it more ear-shaped :3 02:51, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink stretch a bit higher within the ear. <span style="">03:53 Fri Dec 23 03:53, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Made the eyes more amber and lengthened the earpink, but I don't know how to fix the tip of the ear without messing with the blank in places that I didn't edit. I'd have to pretty much remake the whole ear.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:43, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste inbetween the fur near the chest/stomach. <span style="">22:32, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Reuplaoded - Picky picky... :P Just kidding. XD I forgot to erase that part. Should I make his stripes black to match Bramble Hawk and Tiger? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:06, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I think so, tigers normally have black stripes. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 07:09, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mousefur (E) ~ Tweaked
My, it's been a while! I think I got all the waste this time :P. OA was Sandy, tweaked by Mint (thanks Scarletwind). 01:48, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the ear-pink bigger and the shading looks almost non-existent. She also needs a graying head. OA was Sandy and tweaked by Mint. 01:50, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't she said to be longfurred in Sunrise? Yes, she was, i just checked....Make her longfurred. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I'll get that done soon. And sorry, forgot the OA. 14:19, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Comments? 14:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She needs a graying head....take a bit of gray and maybe make flecks on her head? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, forgot the graying head. Sorry! I'll get it done pronto! 14:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can you define the shading a bit more? 14:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Defined shading. The graying head is a fail, I know. Comments? 14:51, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the gray just a tad. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:11, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to have to point this out, but when an animal starts to grey, it typically starts at the muzzle, which is still part of the head. I think you should have the grey radiate from there instead of the top of her head. 21:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, and it says she has a skinny tail, so try making it thinner 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you could try to splice the shortfur tail onto the long fur blank? 22:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Why exactly is she long furred in the first place? It doesn't say long furred or fluffy or anything in the description. Just thick furred, and we decided that doesn't mean they have long fur. Why not change it back to short haired> Then her tail will be automatically skinny. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:36, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know when she's mentioned as long furred. I just went by what Maplepool said. 03:24, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If Maplepool can cite it, then it needs to be added to her description and all her images tweaked. 03:26, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sunrise, Page 141. Its on her page, thats where I got it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:28, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It says that she has thick fur on that page. That doesn't nessessarily mean she should be long haired. It's the same with Firestar, he is described with thick fur but he still is short haired. Although, on that page, it says that she is ungroomed, so you could give her maybe some pelt markings like the ones on Lichenfur. 06:24, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Also (and this would warrant all of her images being tweaked) dusky means dark, and she doesn't look dusky in any of her images. Can you darken her base pelt color? 06:50, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, let me get all this straight. You want her to be shorthaired, darkened base color, markings like Lichenfur, and gray on the muzzle? Sorry, just getting really confused. xP 18:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Yup. Though could you actually make the head just kinda a lot paler and less saturates instead of pure gray? And make it cover most of the head, instead of in little specks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (D) ~ Redone
Comments? And please, only critique this time. 21:25, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

He looks good, Shelly! Define his pale belly, or make it strech up a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:28, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think the pale belly is fine 22:19, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. ^^ Shrink the earpink a bit and blur the pale belly. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you crop the left side of the image so the frame touches the tip of his tail? I'd rather their there not be any empty space. 03:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tho the shrinking seemed a bit pointless... 02:53, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? 20:39, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing (Ki) - Tweaked
The shading needed to be darkened. Comments? 22:17, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink on our left go up more. Also maybe blur the shading/highlights? <span style="">00:13, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Re-uploaded I didn't touch the earpink but you're right. I didn't notice that before. I blurred the shading and I think this is as blurred as I can get it now. 00:58, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Eh guess I worded that wrong I meant that you're right, the earpink did need to be fixed. I fail XD 03:19, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

That's okay xD. <span style="">01:19, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Toadstep (Ki) - Redone
*dies of cuteness* I love this so much! OA was Sandstar12. Needed to match warrior and there were many pre-existing things wrong with the image. Comments for improvement? 03:01, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks ^^ 03:33, December 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Steals* This is so cute! Its so cute, i'm gunna die! Blur the earpink on -> this side more. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:07, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

D'awww! 8D Blur it a bit more please! <span style="">02:49 Mon Dec 26

Blur what? 18:40, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

This is cute, but for some reason I thought the white markings on the face against the black made it evil. xD Oh well, maybe shrink the earpink? <span style="">01:22, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Darken the eyes ;3 05:58, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (W) - Redone
All I have to say is <3 OA was Sandy, with tweaks by a lot of people, the most recent being Paleclaw. 03:45, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Paleh! My Co-writer! Lighten the sahding a ton. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:49, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:53, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Should he have a scar on his muzzle? 22:55, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Scars, not just one. 02:11, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't say multiple scars, just a 'scarred muzzle' that could mean one. I think we should leave it as that. But yes, he does need a scarred muzzle. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:59, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

There was no citation. He needs one if I'm going to add it. 16:59, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (K)~ Redone
OA was Swiftpelt and i redid it, comments? 06:01, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! <3 *steals* define the ear-pink 18:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

and lighten it. - 16:59, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Willie (R) ~ Redone
The stripes, muzzle, and shading needed a little work so I just redid it. Comments? 08:18, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot: who the OA is, why it needed to be redone, and if you had permission to redo it. Blur the shading and stripes. 08:29, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It is on the Redo list, Icy. Define his lighter muzzle, and add triangle stripes over his eyes. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 10:34, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

He was never actually shown with color anywhere, despite his description, so he should be colorless (unless the default tabby color applies to him) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  11:02, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think it does. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 11:16, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

He was on the cover of The Heart of a Warrior. Make his stripe pattern more like his manga picture, blur the ear-pink. 16:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

What is the default tabby color? 08:17, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brown. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 09:13, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. 20:38, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerstar (Ro) ~ Redone
Eh, this blank is hard to work with. DX I know it isn't perfect yet. Comments? 02:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Psssh, rogues are awesome. make the earpink smaller and darken the scars alittle - 02:36, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the earpink a tad darker. 20:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Violet (KP) - Tweak
I'm pretty sure that this still needs to be lighter, since I withdrew last time...If I'm wrong, then, decline this. I got the earpink from the kit, which is the correct color image... Comments...? 03:06, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot. OA was Nightfall101 03:41, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yep it needs to be paler, not lighter. Just make the image more pale a tad more. 20:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Tweaked
My first tweak :3 OA was Icestorm123 and the shading needed to be blurred. 13:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I had reserved this, but I don't want to take away your glory ;3 I'll be happy to give it to you ;D Blur the shading a bit still. 05:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

facepalm* I'm sorry! Anyways, '''Re-Uploaded. ''' 14:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail tip. 14:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 15:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks like she has a gray tail tip, and not a highlight.. Can you fix that? 15:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. 20:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Ki) ~ Redone
Definitely not my favorite. *sigh* But I love Hawkfrosts character.. So I gave it a go. >.< 21:22, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, forgot to add something. OA= Minnowclaw, later on tweaked by Icethroat21 and redone by Paleclaw, I believe. 21:25, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Phew, thanks Maple! ^-^ I already had his tail with a mackerel stripe, so I just thickened it. 22:37, December 26, 2011 (UTC)
 * squeals* He's so cute! Make his tail stripes marckel. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:30, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the eyes be ice blue? 23:20, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I took the color off of his new warrior image, do you want me to still change it? 01:54, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, it might just be me. I can barely see the one pixel of color. 03:11, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to change the style? 04:29, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Smudge the white chest and darken the shading. 17:01, December 27, 2011 (UTC)