Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 55

Dewkit ~ Silver Nomination
I added a quote. Comments?

That was me. Forgot my siggie. 07:06, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think she's ready! She wasn't seen very much in Night Whispers, but her article is well written. The first paragraph seemed kind of short, so I expanded it a little. 15:18, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you sure there's no more narrator quotes or anything like that? 17:51, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yea because that's pretty much all she says in the whold book so....yea. And thanks, Ivyheart for expanding the history! 71.135.168.24 09:02, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

What happened to my siggie?oh, there.

Looks good then! 22:13, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! Great job! 18:17, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Where any of them (Dewkit, Mistkit, Sparrowkit) seen in Sign of the Moon? I don't think they were, so I guess you should add that, unless they were seen. 23:27, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, they weren't, but I don't think they died, either. I'll add it then. 23:36, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think Sparrowkit in the main quote is supposed to be linked to his page, but I'm not sure. Otherwise, this article looks superb to me. :) 00:50, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. 22:36, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! On the CBV list then. 20:19, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

So...CBV? 20:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 16:19, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mistkit (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
I saw that Dewkit was nominated, so I checked out Mistkit and expaned her article, and I thought it was good enough. Now we just need a main quote, but I'm not sure how to add it in. Comments? 20:14, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think it can be expanded some more. For the main quote see this: Template:Main Quote, and you should be able to add it in. 20:24, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I added in a main quote, it was the only thing she said, but I guess it's ok. As for the history, I will try to expand it more, if possible. She didn't appear very much. 21:26, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded the history as much as I could. 21:46, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

History looks much better now! Nice job! =) Are you sure there aren't any narrator quotes that you could use? 22:26, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I don't think there are any good narrator ones, as far as I've looked. 23:32, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, looks good then! 23:39, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Does anyone think there are more things I should check out? 18:03, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nope! It looks good. 01:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think there was a good narrator quote, but I guess I'm wrong. Looks great! 18:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

So it's almost ready, I guess? 17:44, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it will probably be on the CBV list. 17:46, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

It is. 03:45, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Where is the CBV list? xD 19:13, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's a mental list. :) 17:28, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Allrighty then xD 15:34, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 21:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 16:45, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower ~ Silver Nomination
I'm still looking for quotes that describe her personality and checking for grammar mistakes. Besides those, comments? -- 06:52, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

These quotes looks good! I'm pretty sure I fixed all the grammar mistakes, so you don't have to worry about that. 16:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to add more detail to the last paragraph, as in does she say anything, do anything, etc.? 16:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Could you expand the last paragraph of Crookedstar's Promise? 16:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! I'll go check the book right now and do the things above later if possible. 07:40, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the last paragraph. How does it look now? 07:56, July 19, 2011 (UTC)L

Looks great! 18:43, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Good work! This can be cBVed once more votes close. 23:58, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks great! The article looks as long as it could be. 03:31, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 15:10, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Vote's up 20:26, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) - Silver Nomination
Woo. He looks good, his history is expanded and he has references. 23:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have any quotes? From the narrator or anything? 02:19, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Just realized...you already have 4 nominations up. Sorry, but the guidelines say that you can only have 3 nominations up at a time, so this will be archived. After the votes close for you other ones, you can start this again... 18:57, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Since Sedgecreek is on voting, I'm going to start this up again. Comments? 01:34, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Like I said before, does he have any quotes? 02:58, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see. 15:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (TC) ~ Silver Nomination
I'm expanding it now and trying to find quotes. 19:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I thought you said that you didn't nominate minor characters. Find the quote mentioned in the second paragraph of the history. 19:32, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't, but my new goal is to nominate them all in alphabetical order, so I just happened to find a minor character that isn't silver already. 19:53, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

There, I expanded it to it's extent. Please don't say expand it more, as I already did, and it can't be expanded further. I also found quotes. Anything else? 21:16, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

It seems fine to me. 23:44, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! Good job. 02:27, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, this will be on the CBV list. 20:20, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 16:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up. 17:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sparrowkit - Silver Nomination
I'm adding another quote in right now. So, comments? :3 23:22, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Add another quote, and add in the quote descriptions, and it should be ready! 23:48, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can it be expanded some more? 23:57, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

The three littermates are being nominated at the same time! xD The article looks great, though I think the history could be expanded, if you look through the chapters they are in, in Night Whispers. That's how I expanded Mistkit's article. 17:46, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded his history and gave the quotes descriptions, but there isn't really anymore quotes that describe him well. If he reallly needs another quote, though, I'll add one. 19:13, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

His article is looking great! :) 19:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! 19:43, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think another quote would be nice since the article is so short anyway. 23:50, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

After another quote, it'll probably look good. 19:31, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mkay, I'll add one. 19:44, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Added. 15:43, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Looks great! 16:48, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ditto! 16:49, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 15:14, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:45, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, Atelda did it first...my computer's too slow. 17:52, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Beechpaw (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
I hate nominating characters that appear so briefly that there's hardly anything about them. Oh well. Hopefully this gets approved fast so I can do a better one. Comments? 19:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any quotes from the narrator that can be added? 19:41, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

No, there's literally only one sentence that mentions him in the book at all. 23:33, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

If there's absolutely no other quotes you can have for him/her, then I don't see what else you can do. -- 04:43, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ditto. 22:45, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

One more for the CBV list! :P 20:21, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 15:15, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:48, August 15, 2011 (UTC)