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Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here.

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail?

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail?

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean.

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match?

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional.  16:01 Sat Feb 6 

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps.  10:53 Sun Feb 7 

I think the tail could be raised a few pixels up on the back of the cat, and the neck needs to be thickened a bit ( http://prntscr.com/a1872f ), and the raised paw should be backed up a few pixels and made smaller. The tum could be dropped a pixel or two, and the ears made a bit neater. The longhair should probably have long fur all the way up to the chin too, as well as the shoulder being fuzzy. 23:45, 02/9/2016

reuploaded. thanks so much, i think they look a lot better now. 02:41 Tue Feb 16

Comments before approval? 03:59, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Add white to the chararts so they look like the other blanks. Great job! ^_^

Sorry for bothering you again but could you add a little bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest while you're at it? Just one or two lines will do.  16:58 Tue Feb 16 

Can I ask why the blanks have to be white? 17:29 16/2/16

It's just below the lineart, Velvet. All of the other blanks have that, so I don't see why these shouldn't. That can be added afterwards, though. And I said the same thing on Skype that I'm gonna say now, the feet are a bit too... flat, for lack of a better word. Using what Berry also said to me, a cat usually walks on their toes, so the only way they'd be completely flat is if they're sitting.

As I said on Skype, the picture Splook based this off has the cat in the exact same pose with her legs on the ground. In fact, my cats' legs are on the ground when she's asking for food in the same position. :/ 04:29, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

The back legs would be up in the air a little bit, as per Skye. Cats do in fact walk on their toesies. 12:47, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Also sorry foe edit spam but the whiskers that are going <== this way off the blank sre bothering me, since the other whiskers are flat against the side of the face. Basically get rid of those whiskers 12:49, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think the back legs are fine. I have seen my cat and if you google images of a cat you will find some in this position or with their feet in that position. Just because it's not common doesn't make it inaccurate. 21:03, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Exactly, Velvet. You bring up an amazing point. Anyways, here's a picture of the legs Splook used: They're not on their toes. Splook's legs are fine. 01:37, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

If someone would like to argue the opposite, may you please draw a redline and show me what it would look like if the legs were altered? 02:05 Thu Feb 18

No, you don't need to change it becuase it's fine. I provided proof that cats legs cna look like it and in general, they can. 02:06, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey now, chill. She asked for a redline to see what they'd look like, and there's nothing wrong with that. If she chooses to not do so after the redline is given, then that's fine. But since she did ask for one to support the argument against her, then I think she should be given one. (I can't redline, sorry)

I'm not particularly bothered what happens with the back legs, but is this what you guys had in mind?  15:18 Thu Feb 18 

Leafpool (MC) - CBA
Also looked better in gimp. 01:59, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Please smudge the stripes with a hard edged brush instead of blurring them, as they're smudged on her other images. Also, the shading needs to be defined and its leaking in some places. Also, the paws look gray. The ear pink is also very hard edged.

Could you define your light source? The tail shading says it's the right, but rest of the image says the left. Also, define the light on the raised front leg.  10:50 Sun Feb 7 

Re-uploaded: <_< 18:56, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Why the "<_<"? It's not like I and Shinx were being rude or anything, I was just asking you to fix something on your image. And define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us.

Re-uploaded: It's directed towards my image, Fox. Not you or Shinx. 01:59, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading ? She looks a bit flat <span style="">18:21, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: I can't expand this anymore. This as much as it'll get before it looks like the entire image is in shading. 18:44, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think she has a stripe down her back and tail? 22:25, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Couch you blur the shading a bit more on the tum? Also define the shading on the raised paw <span style="">22:44, 02/8/2016

About the stripe, is it visible on this blank? I'm not sure, that's why I didn't include it. 23:22, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Please kill me. 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The paws still look gray

Re-uploaded: I think this is gonna be as white as I'm gonna get it. 12:35, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

There's more white on her chest in her other images (at least the kit and apprentice). And the white parts look a bit more dark in her other pictures. Also, there doesn't seem to be much shading on the herbs. <span style="">22:41 Thu Feb 11

Re-uploaded: please don't ask me to extend the white anymore. 00:02, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the stripe color to match the others, and the white on her face extends out over her muzzle. She also has dark ear-tips and a dark tail-tip, and the white on her chest should be expanded a bit mroe, as it covers the whole chest. (If you lower it down to about where the stripe crosses below it, and expand it to the left until you hit the lineart defining the chest, it'll probs be alright.) If you want the file for her warrior, I can send that to you, too, for exact colors and whatnot. 06:25, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, can you please send it to me? My email is icestormrocks@aol.com 13:23, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

There's a gray dot outside her right leg.

Re-uploaded: Would appreciate some tips for the white chest. 20:51, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

My advice is to make it flow with the shape of the cat more. Instead of smudging it diagonally, smudge it downwards with the flow of the belly. <span style="">03:02 Tue Feb 16

Re-uploaded: 03:58, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">20:09 Tue Feb 16

Sorry, but could you define the shading on the hind leg closest to us? <span style="">02:18, 02/17/2016

Smudge the stripes, too. 02:51, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thanks to Leggy for the file btw. 04:14, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

There's a white dot below her muzzle next to the red berry.

Re-uploaded: 17:15, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

The white dot is still there.

No it's not. I'm not sure where you're looking or if it's your screen, but there is no dot where the muzzle is anywhere. 23:11, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-CBA? <span style="">02:06 Thu Feb 18

Echosnout (MC) ~ CBA
03:26, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

I have the file for the StarClan let me know if you need it. 20:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth.

Reups 19:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

can you crop the image? 19:14, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 19:18, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't the image be cropped some more, or is it jsut my eyes? 13:37, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

It's pretty much the same as Mothwing's - I think it's alright. 14:10, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be cropped more- there's still way too much excess space in <-- side of the lineart. For that matter, Mothwing's needs to be cropped too.

Reups in that case, I've cropped this and Moth's. 14:50, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Dull the shading slightly please, I know its tinted but its making the white appear mainly blue. 07:28, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 17:17, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 17:36, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) - CBA
It's been a while... 06:07, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Defin e the shading and expand it on the stomach, and define the light on the first front legs. Also smooth it out some more. 06:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also tried to match the previous image better. It's so hard o.o 06:49, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded again 06:51, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add shading on the back leg and the tail and expand it on the stomach ? 06:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:58, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a little more?  <span style="">09:42 Tue Feb 9 

his stripes need mottles on them. 13:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

and crop the image too. 14:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not very happy with his mottles and his stripe style, can anyone give me tips? :\ 07:44, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:56, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Again... 11:00, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add some more depth on the stripes with the stomach, and possibly smooth out the shading some more? I'm sorry if I'm being picky - you don't have to do it if you don't want to. 12:41, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Stripes need to be more mottled, look at the apprentices for comparison. <span style="">01:36, 02/11/2016

Reuploaded x2 07:53, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

The berries should be like pink, red, blue, purple, not green. That's probably wicked nitpicky but eh. Nice job on this. <span style="">19:32, 02/11/2016

The berries are fine ... green berries exist in the wild. 19:54, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Additionally you could probably portray those as leaves on a twig if you wanted to :P  <span style="">20:46 Thu Feb 11 

Define face shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:33, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

The face shading is pretty defined, actually, I think it should be lightened. <span style="">19:22, 02/12/2016

it could be lightened on the body a tick too, it's a bit dark. 16:40, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:24, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit more. I can barely make out the pattern in some places, most notably the right side. 07:25, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 09:34, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define tail shading a little bit? Isn't the back and forth game fun when it comes to shading. This is gorgeous though, Misty<3 <span style="">19:07, 02/14/2016

Reuploaded agreed and thanks ^^ 05:14, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

I can't see any shading on the stomach and I think the stripes could be smoothed out some more. 22:03, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 07:25, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Goosefeather (MC) ~ Declined
thanks to Icy for uploading. Lysandre's battle theme is a great motivator. <span style="">21:54 Wed Feb 10

Define the shading on the face, Who knew team flare could motivate, ps this is lovely! 23:36, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Could you make the ragged fur lineart gray, like it is on the elder and StarClan images? 03:49, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Is that like...a rule that we have now...? When I tweaked the medicine cat ages ago that wasn't a thing. I don't see the point in having it grey. <span style="">05:55 Thu Feb 11

The lineart should be black anyways. Why is it gray on his other images????

darken the right ears earpink.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 17:12, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Earpink is fine Mink <span style="">19:28, 02/11/2016

Could you define the shading depth on the tum a little bit? <span style="">19:04, 02/14/2016

Declined due to lack of work. Sorry, dear. ;.;

Runningnose (Alt MC) - For Approval
Insanely proud of this, tbh. I figure since he's got patchy fur, I could improvise. His alt has yellow eyes, so I kept that, since as far as I know, he doesn't have a cited eye color...and I don't think I need to match the eye color his normal images have.

Nice! :D Define face and belly shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:38, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is a very evil pattern.

Add his boogies. give this poor child a tissue <span style="">19:03, 02/14/2016

Erm, I did. I just didn't use exactly the same style the previous alt had before it, that's all.

Define them then? Because I honestly can't see them, even now that I know you have them on there. <span style="">19:08, 02/14/2016

Re-uploaded. Don't exactly have all that much space to work with, here.

His snot is a bit neon now, sorry. <span style="">22:36, 14th Febuary 2016.

Well, snot is green, and it's no different than the other colors I've seen on his images... if I change it, I'm just gonna get told someone else can't see it.

Cartoon snot is neon green. Real snot is grayish-green/translucent green. This is cartoon green 13:13, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

And what's your point? The snot on the previous alt was green. I personally don't see any reason to change it, considering I'm just gonna get told to define it again. Grayish-green or a translucent green doesn't work with this pelt style.

you know snot can actually get quite brighter green in real life? it's fine. 21:00, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Just going to put my two cents in (and I extremely apologize if I come out as rude), but it's just a fictional cat in a fictional world where snot and boogers and diseases can be fictional. So if they need to make the snot neon in order for it to be seen, then it's fine. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 13:58, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, please. 17:35, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Can't say there's much improvement, because of the black, white, and gray placement... but I did try.

Am I seeing things, or is there a random green dot on his back leg..?  <span style="">14:59 Thu Feb 18 

Bellapaw (App) - For Approval
Not sure I matched the shading/texture totally, I might redo that later. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:36, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Wait whoa, the colors don't match at all... what colors did you use, Shinx? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:38, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

In all honesty, I think this is what it should look like; the loner's colours clash too much, and this still matches the desc of pale orange... But that's up to you and Shinx to decide I think? I'd go with these though, to match Firestar more, and still have it match her desc. Also, could you smooth the shading on the chin? <span style="">19:12, 02/12/2016

no....this looks very bright orange. 19:16, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

I used the colors in the file you sent me... But no offense, I agree that this looks very bright orange rather than pale.  <span style="">22:23 Fri Feb 12 

I used those colors too. So how did yours end up looking so much paler? What did you do with the highlights/light texture? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:49, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Absolutely nothing. I only changed the tint on the texture. Perhaps make this color a little paler and see if that looks better? I can colorpick, I don't care. But this isn't pale orange.  <span style="">22:56 Fri Feb 12 

Weird... well, anyway, I can agree that it's not bright enough. Can you send me the colors you used, or something? I want to make sure it matches. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:08, February 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * 1) efa370 is what I have.

And I'm going to be honest here.... Firestar's images are a very bright orange. Pale orange would be a lot less bright. ( "2. of a low degree of chroma, saturation, or purity; approaching white or gray: 3. not bright or brilliant; dim:" 'pale' according to the dictionary.) I don't mind changing the colors on my image. I really don't. But you guys are asking for both bright orange and pale orange at the same time. I have been playing with the colors all week and can't get anything even close to Firestar's colors while still being pale orange. Ive colorpicked from Firestar (or more specifically, Jake's file. Which is the same color.) and tried to make it paler. Doesn't work out. I've messed with the colors I have now. Doesn't work out. I just spent about half an hour playing with the colors on this image to see if I can make them pale. I've tried to make entirely new colors, I've used dodge and burn, I've tried color sliders, everything I could possibly think of. Unless I have a really screwed up definition of pale, I don't think it's possible. So uh, sorry guys?

If by some miracle you guys find a color that works out then sure (Jayie's color here is nice, but it's not pale. It's bright. And tbh we should be trying to match the "pale orange" description more than the "Looks like firestar" description.), I'll use it. But I'm done with the colors. Especially considering "looking like Firestar" doesn't necessarily mean they have the same pelt color. Sorry for the big long paragraph. I didn't mean for it to get that long :/  <span style="">10:24 Sat Feb 13 

the priority should be her actual description. a lot of things could make her look like firestar - exact colour isny neccessarily one of them. 12:20, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, what's going on with this? o.o

Sorry, I got busy with school. I'll work on it tonight to lighten it to match Shinx's image. Sorry for the confusion and the wait. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:59, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC) - For Approval
protect runningnose <span style="">20:06 Fri Feb 12

Define the light on the left foreleg a little. Precious kitty. 22:30, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

The patchy fur should have black lines not grey? <span style="">16:33, 02/13/2016

The leader, deputy, and old MC blanks all had gray lines, so I think it's okay. And it is black, I just lightened the opacity. <span style="">19:38 Sat Feb 13

I'm the OA of the deputy, and it has black lines. Besides, it's line art, so it should be black. <span style="">14:40, 02/14/2016

Also, his eyes should be rheumy, look closely at the old version, there's a little dark spot under each eye. Also, there should probably be actual mucus coming from his nose, not just little speckles. <span style="">19:02, 02/14/2016

Define the shading just a tad on the legs and tail. 14:38, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. okay well then nominate the other images for a tweak because that lineart is surely not black. <span style="">02:58 Tue Feb 16

It may just be my screen, but define the snot just a tad? I can't see it too well. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 14:00, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I can see it just fine. Comments before approval? 17:32, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the light on the tail needs to be defined- it looks almost like it's all in shading. I also think the head shading might need a tiny bit of definition too, and the light on <-- front leg could be defined as well.

Lulu (Kp) ~ For Approval
I dunno if she needs the stripes or not 12:14, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

She does; her pelt color is a diluted form of ginger, and just like Mousefang.

Define earpink? <span style="">14:49, 02/14/2016

Re-ups 19:52, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 01:29, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt CBA, but why does Lulu get a collar? Her brother doesn't get one, so how does she? I don't think she was ever mentioned with one. --Dewsplash (talk) 16:42, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hold on. I just saw that her brother has a collar. Sorry. --Dewsplash (talk) 16:46, February 18, 2016 (UTC)Dewsplash, 16:45, February, 18, 2016

Featherwhisker (MC) ~ Declined
HNNNNNG The shading sucks :( User:Mayahzdog09

Lighten/ smooth the shading and do not aline your images also please make it full size. <span style="">15:44, February 13, 2016

Try to smoothen out the shading a bit, some of the areas look darker and more blotchy than the rest. Also, blur the earpink and the shading on the herbs a little bit more. 15:56, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the earpink at the bottom some and lengthen the wiskers 07:14, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define your light source, and define the shading on the face. <span style="">14:51, 02/14/2016

Sorry for not being on too long. I probably wont do it now because I have to go to church soon. User:Mayahzdog09

Still working? 04:36, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

No date on the table. This is declined.

Dapplepelt (MC) ~ CBA
Soft kitty,warm kitty,little ball of fur.. 17:11, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

happy kitty, sleepy kitty, purr purr purr... Defline the light on the legs? this is gorgeoUS <span style="">00:14, 02/14/2016

This is so pretty :3 But it seems that, for her other images, there is more white on the tail, but that could just be because of the angle. Also, idk if it might actually be shading, but her other pictures have thin streaks of black on the tail instead of a thicker stripe down the middle. <span style="">02:00 Mon Feb 15

Define the light on the legs.

Re-ups 19:52, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

My pattern is a lot more hard edged than this  03:53, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 15:20, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 01:31, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Alt. MC) - For Approval
yell fang. thanks to David for the lineart. <span style="">22:10, 02/13/2016

Hate to be that person, but since the alternate rogue of this same coloring doesn't have texture, I really don't think it's appropriate for this one to, since alts do need to match, I believe.

oh her muzzle has to be altered slightly too since that was from the previous version (i think) so I'll send that to you. 22:41, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

'Reuploaded oops, I forgot to remove the texture. Also, thank you David! <span style="">00:11, 02/14/2016

Um the muzzle looks to triangular could you round it slightly <span style="">22:22, 14/2/16

It won't look as flat if I do, besides, it's exactly the same as her normal medicine cat. <span style="">22:35, 02/14/2016

Could I get comments or something please? <span style="">14:03, 02/17/2016

Maybe lighten the shading a few ticks? 17:17, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine. <span style="">18:05 Wed Feb 17

At least smooth it out then? 04:35, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

I honestly don't think it needs to be smoothed out at all. Super smooth shading works for some, but not for all.

Sandstorm (MC) - CBA
When I went to name her file I typed Sandstove. so she's now Sandstove <span style="">20:16, 02/14/2016

Smooth out the chest/shoulder shading a bit. 22:38, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">23:56, 02/16/2016

Comments before approval? 01:32, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Lulu (K) ~ For Approval
Im proud of this. 03:20, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

whoop, i need to match the other, i didnt see that there. Ill get it later. 04:05, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

I love how you made the eyes different colored,so i change my kittypet's eyes too :D 19:06, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on the hindpaw?

The shading in general needs to be defined, expanded, and lightened. 17:16, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

re-up i redid the whole fricken thing, i see some errors, ill fix em. 00:23, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

The other image seems... a bit softer, for lack of a better word? Also, define the shading.

Fawnstep (MC) ~ For Approval
I like this one 17:30, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

changes 17:33, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes. 17:16, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten up the front paws a bit.

Violet (KP) (Q) - For Approval
I will be working on the stripes. Even though it's a different view, I am not sure what I think of it. And it doesn't really match the original style well...so please do not comment on that; I already know. <span style="">01:11 Thu Feb 18

Which image did you get the base color from? It seems a tiny bit darker on this than it does her kittypet. Might be my eyes, though.

Echosong (MC) - For Approval
I think the shading was tinted on the original MC... but I tried. I'll define the shading on the white tomorrow. I also need to smudge the leg stripes more...

Expand / define the shading on the body. 04:34, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I defined it, but only expanded it on the stomach- this is actually a slightly tweaked version of Cloudberry's shading oops.