Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Graypool (Ki) ~ Redo
Comments for Improvement? 01:50, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason it needed to be redone? Define the earpink and blur the shading. Also define your light source/add more shading, it doesn't really make sence now. (Ignore this if I'm wrong) 03:26, 10, 04, 2012

OAs are Brightheart345 with a redo? by Shadewing. And needed to be redone to match the warrior and elder. And there is a light source, it's coming from the side. It makes sense to me but if others want me to change it, I will. 21:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

I have defined the earpink. Change aren't showing..may not show for a while. 22:00, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading to the neck and tail so it doesn't look flat. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a girl? ouo 19:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

To confirm, I did a tweak on it. I noticed you weren't sure. 19:56, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the shading a lot. 23:42, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Does this shading make more sense? 17:02, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing, reupload it again so we can at least see it in the file history? 19:26, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I uploaded it again but I'm not sure that it'll show the changes. 00:14, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the chest if there is any owo 15:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't intend to have shading there, but I could add it in if you want. 18:05, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading, and the shading near the chest-area (sorta on the neck) looks blotchy. Thin it out and make it less round? x3 00:38, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Cinder? o3o 12:53, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Duke (KP) ~ Withdrawn
Woo 8D I know the earpink is weird, I'm fixing it in a moment...the collar, ears, and eyes are the exact same, so I'm not changing them. Comments? :3 17:12, 04 11, 2012

The eyes look kinda pixily, make the eye gradient smooth  17:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, I can't really see it. 17:17 Wed Apr 11

Re-uploaded. 17:37, 04 11, 2012

Maybe make the black on the haunch curve a bit more? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 10:04, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail stripe to make it flow with the pelt more. Skt, I can't, because I'd have to paint over or remove what's on the haunch now, remember how I blurred so it looked the same, and then it would curve...I tried, and it looked unnatural. Sorry Dx 12:00, 04 12, 2012

Psssh, no apologise, twas just a suggestion. ;3 Make the nose pink a little less neon, and define the earpink a smidge? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:32, 04 12, 2012

Define the shading towards the end of the tail  00:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:36, 04 15, 2012

I just noticed that the tag looks out of place with the studs coming out of the collar, could you remove it and add another stud? 23:50, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is optional but the ears look too straight cut not like a cat clawed them maybe make them more natural... I don't know how to explain. 22:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black patch on the tail reach the actual sides, there's a thin piece of white between the top of the tail and the patch. 10:44, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I lost all of my charart files on my flashdrive...so. -withdraws- ene 21:14, 04 19, 2012

Feathertail (A) ~ Withdrawn
She needed a plumy tail. 8D First tweak~ *is failed* 23:39, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and the OA was Maplefern, with a tweak by Rainwhisper, a redo by Mounty, and another redo by Leaf-storm. 00:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the lineart, make the "bristles" (don't really wanna use that word, but I can't think of anything better) smoother and more flowing (think Squirrelflight but smoother; or maybe like a very silky, fluffy fox tail), and round the tip and make it "arch" a bit. It kinda looks like her tail got very surprise/scared xD 01:01, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So, something like this? :3 09:53, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the lineart on the tail look thicker than the rest of the image? If so, could you thin it out one pixle. 19:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:29, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make it match the warrior a bit better? 14:10, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Curve the tail a bit more to match the original apprentice blank and have most of the pluminess on the bottom of the tail instead of the top. I think this will help. 21:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I lost the old .psd and the new lineart I made won't open in art programs. 07:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ Redone
I probably need to blur the shading here too. OA was Goldencloud tweaked by Appledash. Comments? 22:25, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make tthe earpink smaller, and yes, blur the shading. 23:08, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 13:38 Mon Apr 16

Define the ear pink as well.

This is optional, but can you make the "highlight" on her flank bigger? 14:57, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:17, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlight on her left arm, and (this is optional) add a highlight on the chest, so it looks like there's a pretty light source. :3 00:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, still.

Widen the belly "highlight" some moar. 07:46, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just realised there's waste around it, and I think I'm just going to redo the shading. I'll upload it tomorrow. 01:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:21, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (ki) - Redone
eeeeee, so proud. *squees* Okay, I'm done. OA was Shimmersong, Tweak by Bramble, redone by Mistypebble. Redone due to Lack of realistic stripes. So, besides darkening the stripes (I'm looking at it compared to the rest, and kicking myself), what else needs to be done? Maple On dA and Skye 21:11, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading. 21:21, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

The chest highlight looks a little bright 02:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes and blur/smudge them and the stripes seem to fade into the chest on the other images, try to match that. Also define the earpink. 03:24, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the outer edges of the chest more opaque :3 07:43, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Maplefern? 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yep! It was a very busy week this week, sorry. D: Maple On dA and Skye 11:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Withdrawn
Yeah, the stripes are kinda sloppy... :3 OA = Shimmerpool, and then it was tweaked many times. It needs to match the other images. Comments? 23:42, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Eep! So cute~ 8D Can you define the earpink and make the shading have reddish/brown tint to it so it matches the warrior? And I think there is a white pixel on his forehead. 01:28, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

smuge the stripes moar. cute <3333  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 03:05, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the belly and on the neck. Breeze whisker  03:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Oi... I lost the layers to this one, and I'm just not up for redoing it. =( I'm gonna withdraw this one... 01:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Could I take a try at it? 12:08, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Just remember to reserve it the correct way.

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
I'll take away the pale chest if needed. Redone for triangly stripes. I guess we aren't listing OA's anymore soo. Comments? 21:54, 04 17, 2012

I thought Sky still had claim to this. 22:18 Tue Apr 17

-sigh- If she does, I don't know. It wasn't reserved for her. I thought she was taking a break anyways? I could withdraw it. 22:22, 04 17, 2012

Ha, I was planning to do it when I came back, but I'm not all that bothered. Have it if you want it. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Also, add a stripe running down the back, just like the tail has one, and (if you want), can you move the first part of the stripe under the chin up, an connect it to the eye? 23:37, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

When was she described as this? (just asking) And if you want her to have a paler chest, extend it at a top more. 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)
 * Wait, never mind. xD  15:26, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 02:31, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make this a lot brighter- she was described as pale gray. XD 02:49, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added stripe, defined shading, lightened it...and I'll fix the chest and earpink now. 10:09, 04 18, 2012

Make the stripe going down her back look less like shading. 18:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs to be much paler  18:17, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:48, 04 18, 2012

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 22:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes curve with the body more. 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the right front leg not have any stripes on it...? 10:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes a bit? 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly and lower the opacity on it a bit. 11:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudstar (W) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow, and I believe it needed redone because of the shading, but it also needs to match the new pattern that Cloudy used. I think his shoulder patch might be a little close to his belly patch :S 17:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more and define the haunch shading. 18:14, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

It matches quite well, Ivy. Make the ear pink a little bit smaller, though?

Lighten the earpink as well 08:44, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:00, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blue the earpink. Wonderful Ibly~ 12:50, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Gah ear pink :l  13:35, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Stonefur (D) ~ Tweaked
I didn't see if anyone reserved this. It needed to be light blue-gray. I fixed some of the blurred and miscolored lineart and defined the shading since it was hard to see when I tweaked the colors. OA was Mistystar. Comments? 22:59 Wed Apr 18

Darken the earpink and shading a bit. 00:32, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:28 Thu Apr 19

Blur the neck shading just a tad. 14:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (W) ~ Withdrawn
I feel bad about redoing this one ;.; *slaps self* I tried tweaking it but it was x.x If Leafstorm wants to tweak it, she is more than welcome to. Comments? 23:13 Wed Apr 18

I know this is going to sound rude, but can you at least try and make it look like the other style? If you don't want to, I understand why. After all, redone images are artist's choice...

Could you just tweak him like Breeze pelt whisker did? I know it'll be better for Leaf-storm, since everyone hates seeing their images redone. We don't have to redo this one if we're just changing the colour. 22:51, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I could never seem to get the brown right, withdrawing.

Buzzardstar (A) ~ Redone
I redid it to match the leader... but I lost the xcf file to the leader. DX Oh dang. Well, I think I managed to recreate it pretty well. I might have to up the red balance. Comments? 18:39, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the earpink in the ear farthest away from us. 18:53, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, the leader is slightly darker and redder. 68.103.240.28 03:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - Tweaked
Redid the mud, and earpink (to match apprentice). OA was was Rainwhisper, and the mud didn't look like mud basically. Comments? 19:47, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the mud patches a little more. Breeze whisker  23:20, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, nevermind. Looking at them again they look fine. Breeze whisker  23:21, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (W) ~ Redone
OA is Evanphoto, with a tweak (I think?) by Ivyheart. I took all colors from the apprentice image.

Echomist (Q) - Redone
I'm not going to list the OA because I don't wanna hurt her feelings :S Look if you wanna know. She didn't look tipped in white at all, and the shading needed blended. I rather adore how the results came out, Hailstar sure has a pretty mate <3  22:18, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Blur the flank shading a little. Lovely~ 12:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded :)  13:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to make him brown. Comments? Breeze whisker  22:47, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

This is just a personal opinion, but could you change his eyes to be more amber and less brown? Just if you want to, of course. 22:54, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oh shoot. I didn't realize Mounty already had his warrior up. DX I can take it down and wait if I need to. Breeze whisker  23:29, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Mounty just withdrew hers, so you're probably fine. 23:32, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Q) - Redone
Wheeeee floofy. Shading and white was blotchy. OAs were MosspathofSkyClan, with a tweak by Scarlet. No I can't lighten the white anymore. Comments? 01:12, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Nice! Make the neck shading a little less flat? c: 01:52, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the flank shading please :3 Lovely  11:02, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

I hate saying no to more than one thing, but I can't make the neck shading less flat as it's completely in the shadows cause of the light source, and i prefer dark shading so I'd rather not lighten the flank. Sorry. 14:25, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Darkflower (W) ~ Tweak
OA was Spottedwing, with a re-do by me. The shading was...icky...and I swear, this is tweaked. Layers and the blur tool ftw.

Lakeshine (Q) ~ Redone
Comments? 02:04 Fri Apr 20

Purdy kitteh! Lighten/brighten the ear-pink and fill in the white pixel on her left forepaw *hope my eyes aren't spazzing*. 02:46, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

It looks tinted brown just a bit, can you fix that? (sorry if it's just my computer)  14:32, April 20, 2012 (UTC)