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Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here.

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail?

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail?

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean.

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match?

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional.  16:01 Sat Feb 6 

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps.  10:53 Sun Feb 7 

I think the tail could be raised a few pixels up on the back of the cat, and the neck needs to be thickened a bit ( http://prntscr.com/a1872f ), and the raised paw should be backed up a few pixels and made smaller. The tum could be dropped a pixel or two, and the ears made a bit neater. The longhair should probably have long fur all the way up to the chin too, as well as the shoulder being fuzzy. 23:45, 02/9/2016

Pasha (KP) - CBA
probably gonna redo this later. i was in a hurry. 21:48 Tue Feb 2

Could you maybe lighten the base slightly so we can see the shading? 22:19, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base is fine, as the description does state very clearly "almost black" but could you define facial shading just a smidge? 03:23, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This could be my screen but he looks too dark to be "almost black". Perhaps a darkness like Crowfeather would do.

Define the shading depth? 15:19 Wed Feb 3

I think the darkness is fine but can you add some more eye ddepth? Unless it's there and I can't see it. 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base could be lightened a little bit- she was supposed to be almost black, and this looks black. Crowfeather's shade would work wonderfully for this, I think. I also think the shading could be darkened a bit too.

can you make him more brown too. 15:22, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. Some said Crowfeather and Skt said brown so I tried to split the difference 00:53 Sat Feb 6

Why would he need to be brown? He was never described as "dark brown, nearly black" W~

The collar looks flat. Define the shading on it please.

He's not specified as dark grey or dark ginger or anything, so the default would be brown, correct?  11:37 Sat Feb 6 

yes, it would be. :T 11:46, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Define the nosepink, and the shading on the front leg? 20:08, 02/10/2016

reuploaded 19:21 Fri Feb 12

Comments before approval? 21:08, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Bellapaw (Lo) ~ For Approval
I tried to match Berry's apprentice while Rileypaw was on CBA, but I couldn't ;_; So instead have a classic tabby  <span style="">19:15 Fri Feb 5 

Maybe you could make her colors more like Firestar's? She is said to look exactly like him after all. 22:01, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

I've been playing around for a little while and honestly I can't ake the colors any more like Firestar's whilst still matching the pale orange description. I even colorpicked and just made the colors lighter- it still doesn't like anything like Firestar. Unless you can give me a color that's both pale orange //and// looks like Firestar..?  <span style="">23:35 Fri Feb 5 

Mind if I play around with a new pattern/colors on the apprentice and see if I can get it to look more like Firestar but still light? If not, that's totally fine, I'll match this. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:49, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I'd much rather keep the pattern like this if possible (I'm really proud of it) but mess with the color all you like. Would you like the file?  <span style="">11:08 Sat Feb 6 

So what's our stance with this? Is Jayie still going to take the apprentice to fiddle around with it to get a color Shinx can match? Or are we not doing anything? 12:42, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Jayie has the file and has said that she's going to fiddle with the colors on the apprentice. I'm still waiting for that though. This isn't going to be declined if it hits one week while I'm waiting for Jayie, is it?  <span style="">13:47 Wed Feb 10 

Nope. 13:48, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

reups Heard back from Jayie. Any more firestar-ish from here just looks dark tan, or bright red, or yellow rather than pale orange. Trust me, I've tried.  <span style="">15:21 Wed Feb 10 

Can you lighten the shading a little? <span style="">16:04 Fri Feb 12

reups  <span style="">22:36 Fri Feb 12 

Icewhisker (MC) - CBA
This looked better in gimp. :/ 01:37, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and eye depth.

Re-uploaded: :/ 19:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading? <span style="">19:52 Sun Feb 7

Define the light on the legs, actually, and expand and define shading everywhere else. The herbs also look pretty neon, perhaps saturate them a little more? <span style="">18:29, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: 18:45, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

smudge the earpink 21:09, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes 22:12, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? It doesn't look any different from before, they still look fully covered in shading <span style="">22:50, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: THe earpink was already smudged before but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 23:23, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think since your source is coming from the top left, the shading on the legs and tail would be switched to the other side. 00:39, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Theres some shading leaking on the back leg. Define the light on the legs and theres also some shading from the tail leaking onto the cheek. 18:54, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I think this is as defined as the light's going to get, however, if it isn't satisfactory I'll try and do it some more while wrestling with a shark. Is that funny? Idk, I'm tired. 23:59, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth a little? 01:22, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the belly.

Re-uploaded; 12:35, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">20:09 Fri Feb 12

I checked on my tablet, phone, and laptop before commenting...and I still see leaking belly shading.

re-uploaded: 17:01, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Leaking shading is gone now. 8D Re-CBA?

Leafpool (MC) - For Approval
Also looked better in gimp. 01:59, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Please smudge the stripes with a hard edged brush instead of blurring them, as they're smudged on her other images. Also, the shading needs to be defined and its leaking in some places. Also, the paws look gray. The ear pink is also very hard edged.

Could you define your light source? The tail shading says it's the right, but rest of the image says the left. Also, define the light on the raised front leg.  <span style="">10:50 Sun Feb 7 

Re-uploaded: <_< 18:56, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Why the "<_<"? It's not like I and Shinx were being rude or anything, I was just asking you to fix something on your image. And define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us.

Re-uploaded: It's directed towards my image, Fox. Not you or Shinx. 01:59, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading ? She looks a bit flat <span style="">18:21, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: I can't expand this anymore. This as much as it'll get before it looks like the entire image is in shading. 18:44, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think she has a stripe down her back and tail? 22:25, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Couch you blur the shading a bit more on the tum? Also define the shading on the raised paw <span style="">22:44, 02/8/2016

About the stripe, is it visible on this blank? I'm not sure, that's why I didn't include it. 23:22, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Please kill me. 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The paws still look gray

Re-uploaded: I think this is gonna be as white as I'm gonna get it. 12:35, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

There's more white on her chest in her other images (at least the kit and apprentice). And the white parts look a bit more dark in her other pictures. Also, there doesn't seem to be much shading on the herbs. <span style="">22:41 Thu Feb 11

Re-uploaded: please don't ask me to extend the white anymore. 00:02, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the stripe color to match the others, and the white on her face extends out over her muzzle. She also has dark ear-tips and a dark tail-tip, and the white on her chest should be expanded a bit mroe, as it covers the whole chest. (If you lower it down to about where the stripe crosses below it, and expand it to the left until you hit the lineart defining the chest, it'll probs be alright.) If you want the file for her warrior, I can send that to you, too, for exact colors and whatnot. 06:25, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, can you please send it to me? My email is icestormrocks@aol.com 13:23, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

There's a gray dot outside her right leg.

Re-uploaded: Would appreciate some tips for the white chest. 20:51, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Echosnout (MC) ~ For Approval
03:26, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

I have the file for the StarClan let me know if you need it. 20:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth.

Reups 19:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

can you crop the image? 19:14, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reups 19:18, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't the image be cropped some more, or is it jsut my eyes? 13:37, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

It's pretty much the same as Mothwing's - I think it's alright. 14:10, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

It needs to be cropped more- there's still way too much excess space in <-- side of the lineart. For that matter, Mothwing's needs to be cropped too.

Reups in that case, I've cropped this and Moth's. 14:50, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Dull the shading slightly please, I know its tinted but its making the white appear mainly blue. 07:28, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval
matched the colors with the old one— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:27, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I can barely pick out the herbs from the fur. Maybe lighten the herb colours. 16:33, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:39, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading, define and smudge the earpink, and define the shading on the herbs and berries. Also, there's waste in that space between the raised front leg and the hind leg that touches said leg. <span style="">18:12, 02/8/2016

Try to lighten the herbs some more. 05:45, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 17:59, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Should this not be called for evaluation? Sorry if I'm wrong. 18:24, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

There's no point in changing the heading now, considering she's already passed the requirements to become an apprentice in the project.

Define the herb shading - they look a bit flat 19:10, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 14:19, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading on the main body, particularly around the lower-back. <span style="">16:53 Wed Feb 10

Define the light on the front legs, and define shading everywhere else but the face. The shading on the front legs could probably honestly be lightened bc I can't see the lineart to tell there are two legs there... Looks like the paws are merging as one. <span style="">19:11, 02/14/2016

Micah (MC) ~ For Approval
Eyyyyy 00:35, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Receed the shading on the chest, I think a bit more light would be hitting her chest, and, with your light source, the shading should switching to the other side of her left foreleg. Very pretty! 05:30, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Micahs a dude bro xD and also no to the leg, because the other leg is in front of that one and would be blocking light. 05:35, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

lightent eh chest and cheek shading— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:34, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The shading darkness is fine. Its the same darkness on the other images. Ill get to removing some chest shading tonight 18:52, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to lighten the shading that much, Winter. It does look a bit dark in some places. I know you prefer darker shading, but it does appear to clash in some places, such as the tail, face, and front legs.

But i cant lighten the shading depth without lightening it everywhere else, and id rather not get told to define the shading. 18:55, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

I think in this case, you should be fine. The shading doesn't need to be lightened all that much- it's not that dark, and the way you have it blurred gives it tons of depth, even when it's light (which I don't get how you shade that way but that's another stoRY)

Comments before approval? 13:41, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you smooth out the transition from shading to pelt on the neck please? <span style="">16:52 Wed Feb 10

What do you mean? 16:54, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

And my comment still stands, by the way. Also, I think it's a bit too sharp, is what she's saying.

Perhaps she means from the face to the neck, to the left of the berries? That's what I'm seeing. <span style="">01:38, 02/11/2016

Also, could you blur/smooth the shading a little more on the raised front leg? And perhaps expand the tum shading a little. <span style="">19:09, 02/12/2016

Still working?

Jayfeather (MC) ~ For Approval
It's been a while... 06:07, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Defin e the shading and expand it on the stomach, and define the light on the first front legs. Also smooth it out some more. 06:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also tried to match the previous image better. It's so hard o.o 06:49, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded again 06:51, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add shading on the back leg and the tail and expand it on the stomach ? 06:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:58, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a little more?  <span style="">09:42 Tue Feb 9 

his stripes need mottles on them. 13:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

and crop the image too. 14:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not very happy with his mottles and his stripe style, can anyone give me tips? :\ 07:44, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 08:56, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Again... 11:00, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Add some more depth on the stripes with the stomach, and possibly smooth out the shading some more? I'm sorry if I'm being picky - you don't have to do it if you don't want to. 12:41, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Stripes need to be more mottled, look at the apprentices for comparison. <span style="">01:36, 02/11/2016

Reuploaded x2 07:53, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

The berries should be like pink, red, blue, purple, not green. That's probably wicked nitpicky but eh. Nice job on this. <span style="">19:32, 02/11/2016

The berries are fine ... green berries exist in the wild. 19:54, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Additionally you could probably portray those as leaves on a twig if you wanted to :P  <span style="">20:46 Thu Feb 11 

Define face shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:33, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

The face shading is pretty defined, actually, I think it should be lightened. <span style="">19:22, 02/12/2016

it could be lightened on the body a tick too, it's a bit dark. 16:40, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:24, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit more. I can barely make out the pattern in some places, most notably the right side. 07:25, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 09:34, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define tail shading a little bit? Isn't the back and forth game fun when it comes to shading. This is gorgeous though, Misty<3 <span style="">19:07, 02/14/2016

Littlecloud (MC) - For Approval
All colors from the previous images.

can you curve the stripes a little more near his side and back. They look a little pointy and when I look at the older image they were a bit more curved.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The stripes don't need to match 100%, as this is a different side of the image. Plus, it's kinda hard to curve them anymore than they already are without redoing the pattern. I'd also like to mention that the MC image was at a different angle.

Can you possibly smudge the shading some more, and expand the shading on the stomach and bag leg and tail. 13:44, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't see why I'd need to smudge the shading anymore, so unless you can eloborate why, I'd rather not. The tail shading, I didn't touch if only for the fact I'd like a second opinion (don't agree just to agree; I hate that so much), since I don't want to make it too thick.

Tail shading's fine. <span style="">16:56, 02/12/2016

No it's no. It's too thin. Can you please expand thr shading. It's very thin. 18:31, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

It goes halfway across the tail... that's not thin at all. That's average for tail shading on the images that I've seen posted on this page so far.

it's fine, it's easily visible. can you define the neck and face shading a little bit? 16:38, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the facial shading just a tad. 07:26, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Brackenheart (MC) - For Approval
I love this design. <span style="">22:22 Tue Feb 9

Don't forget to crop the image. 23:50, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="">16:55 Wed Feb 10

Smooth out the shading a little on the legs and chest. Very pretty! 01:26, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Beautiful job! :) The other images don't have the stripe extending from his forehead to his nose, so remove that.

Yes his StarClan does. It's fine don't remove it. 10:36, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

I meant the cream stripe, not the dark brown stripe.

The shading on the tail could use some smoothing out too. <span style="">19:05, 02/14/2016

Ravenwing (MC) ~ For Approval
No idea how to crop this so I'll do it in the next upload 11:06, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the tum, and smooth the shoulder shading. Also, define the shading on the hind legs and tail. <span style="">20:19, 02/10/2016

Re-uploaded Might need to crop it some more idk 21:27, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Goosefeather (MC) ~ For Approval
thanks to Icy for uploading. Lysandre's battle theme is a great motivator. <span style="">21:54 Wed Feb 10

Define the shading on the face, Who knew team flare could motivate, ps this is lovely! 23:36, February 10, 2016 (UTC)

Could you make the ragged fur lineart gray, like it is on the elder and StarClan images? 03:49, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Is that like...a rule that we have now...? When I tweaked the medicine cat ages ago that wasn't a thing. I don't see the point in having it grey. <span style="">05:55 Thu Feb 11

The lineart should be black anyways. Why is it gray on his other images????

darken the right ears earpink.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 17:12, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Earpink is fine Mink <span style="">19:28, 02/11/2016

Could you define the shading depth on the tum a little bit? <span style="">19:04, 02/14/2016

Pearnose (MC) - For Approval
Idk. 01:20, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the main body shading a bit? <span style="">20:11 Fri Feb 12

Re-uploaded. 21:27, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Hawkheart (MC) ~ For Approval
 <span style="">18:51 Thu Feb 11 

Define the black dapples? <span style="">13:01, 02/12/2016

reups  <span style="">14:43 Fri Feb 12 

define the grey and texture. 17:49, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:31, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

reups  <span style="">22:36 Fri Feb 12 

I hate to do this to ya, but define the black dapples again? Now that all that other stuff's been defined the black has been eaten. I love his facial shading??? nice. <span style="">19:04, 02/14/2016

Yellowfang (MC) ~ For Approval
yellfang 20:30, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading, gorgeous! 21:47, February 11, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:22, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

I'm laughing yellowfang is litearlly saying "i have had ENOUGH" also can you define the tail shading? 13:25, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

She is glorious, you have done her beautifully but could you define the flat muzzle more? 17:12, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded thats as flat as you're gonna get it. 17:46, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt MC 2) - For Approval
- well, I tried... 08:00, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hind leg closest to us and raised front paw? <span style="">19:15, 02/12/2016

Re-uploaded 03:13, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Frecklewish (Alt MC) - For Approval
- there's something not quite right, but I'm not entirely sure what... 08:00, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Add a little depth to the shading on the tum and define the earpink? Also, define the light on the tail and legs? <span style="">19:14, 02/12/2016

Re-uploaded 03:13, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Runningnose (Alt MC) - For Approval
Insanely proud of this, tbh. I figure since he's got patchy fur, I could improvise. His alt has yellow eyes, so I kept that, since as far as I know, he doesn't have a cited eye color...and I don't think I need to match the eye color his normal images have.

Nice! :D Define face and belly shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:38, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is a very evil pattern.

Add his boogies. give this poor child a tissue <span style="">19:03, 02/14/2016

Erm, I did. I just didn't use exactly the same style the previous alt had before it, that's all.

Define them then? Because I honestly can't see them, even now that I know you have them on there. <span style="">19:08, 02/14/2016

Re-uploaded. Don't exactly have all that much space to work with, here.

Bellapaw (App) - For Approval
Not sure I matched the shading/texture totally, I might redo that later. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:36, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Wait whoa, the colors don't match at all... what colors did you use, Shinx? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:38, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

In all honesty, I think this is what it should look like; the loner's colours clash too much, and this still matches the desc of pale orange... But that's up to you and Shinx to decide I think? I'd go with these though, to match Firestar more, and still have it match her desc. Also, could you smooth the shading on the chin? <span style="">19:12, 02/12/2016

no....this looks very bright orange. 19:16, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

I used the colors in the file you sent me... But no offense, I agree that this looks very bright orange rather than pale.  <span style="">22:23 Fri Feb 12 

I used those colors too. So how did yours end up looking so much paler? What did you do with the highlights/light texture? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:49, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Absolutely nothing. I only changed the tint on the texture. Perhaps make this color a little paler and see if that looks better? I can colorpick, I don't care. But this isn't pale orange.  <span style="">22:56 Fri Feb 12 

Weird... well, anyway, I can agree that it's not bright enough. Can you send me the colors you used, or something? I want to make sure it matches. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:08, February 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * 1) efa370 is what I have.

And I'm going to be honest here.... Firestar's images are a very bright orange. Pale orange would be a lot less bright. ( "2. of a low degree of chroma, saturation, or purity; approaching white or gray: 3. not bright or brilliant; dim:" 'pale' according to the dictionary.) I don't mind changing the colors on my image. I really don't. But you guys are asking for both bright orange and pale orange at the same time. I have been playing with the colors all week and can't get anything even close to Firestar's colors while still being pale orange. Ive colorpicked from Firestar (or more specifically, Jake's file. Which is the same color.) and tried to make it paler. Doesn't work out. I've messed with the colors I have now. Doesn't work out. I just spent about half an hour playing with the colors on this image to see if I can make them pale. I've tried to make entirely new colors, I've used dodge and burn, I've tried color sliders, everything I could possibly think of. Unless I have a really screwed up definition of pale, I don't think it's possible. So uh, sorry guys?

If by some miracle you guys find a color that works out then sure (Jayie's color here is nice, but it's not pale. It's bright. And tbh we should be trying to match the "pale orange" description more than the "Looks like firestar" description.), I'll use it. But I'm done with the colors. Especially considering "looking like Firestar" doesn't necessarily mean they have the same pelt color. Sorry for the big long paragraph. I didn't mean for it to get that long :/  <span style="">10:24 Sat Feb 13 

the priority should be her actual description. a lot of things could make her look like firestar - exact colour isny neccessarily one of them. 12:20, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC) - For Approval
protect runningnose <span style="">20:06 Fri Feb 12

Define the light on the left foreleg a little. Precious kitty. 22:30, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

The patchy fur should have black lines not grey? <span style="">16:33, 02/13/2016

The leader, deputy, and old MC blanks all had gray lines, so I think it's okay. And it is black, I just lightened the opacity. <span style="">19:38 Sat Feb 13

I'm the OA of the deputy, and it has black lines. Besides, it's line art, so it should be black. <span style="">14:40, 02/14/2016

Also, his eyes should be rheumy, look closely at the old version, there's a little dark spot under each eye. Also, there should probably be actual mucus coming from his nose, not just little speckles. <span style="">19:02, 02/14/2016

Hawkheart (MC alt) - For Approval
I think it needs more grey. If it does will fix next upload. 22:44, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

The grey needs to be a lot lighter. Define the shading on the berries and herbs, as well as on the legs, tum, and tail. Smooth out the chest shading too, and define earpink. <span style="">18:59, 02/14/2016

Reupload did everything you asked ferk. <span style="">19:45, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Sloefur (D) ~ Declined
This is my first charart. Mayahzdog09 (talk) 23:40, February 12, 2016

Sorry buddy, the deputy blanks aren't approved. You're not allowed to reserve or post a deputy image until they're approved.  <span style="">23:43 Fri Feb 12 

Oh. Sorry. Mayahzdog09

Declining.

Flametail (MC) ~ For Approval
Harder pattern to match than I thought. x-x At least the improvement really shows. 2:00, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

shading needs defining everywhere. 14:26, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Ended up redoing the shading altogether, I didn't like the way it looked before 16:10, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink in the shading a tad bit? <span style="">19:37 Sat Feb 13

Re-ups 22:17, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail, and lighten it a little bit on the chest, it's making the pale parts look dark. Lighten the facial shading a little bit too, that should help define the earpink <span style="">19:00, 02/14/2016

Lulu (Kp) ~ For Approval
I dunno if she needs the stripes or not 12:14, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

She does; her pelt color is a diluted form of ginger, and just like Mousefang.

Define earpink? <span style="">14:49, 02/14/2016

Featherwhisker (MC) ~ For Evaluation
HNNNNNG The shading sucks :( User:Mayahzdog09

Lighten/ smooth the shading and do not aline your images also please make it full size. 15:44, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Try to smoothen out the shading a bit, some of the areas look darker and more blotchy than the rest. Also, blur the earpink and the shading on the herbs a little bit more. 15:56, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the earpink at the bottom some and lengthen the wiskers 07:14, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define your light source, and define the shading on the face. <span style="">14:51, 02/14/2016

Sorry for not being on too long. I probably wont do it now because I have to go to church soon. User:Mayahzdog09

Dapplepelt (MC) ~ For Approval
Soft kitty,warm kitty,little ball of fur.. 17:11, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

happy kitty, sleepy kitty, purr purr purr... Defline the light on the legs? this is gorgeoUS <span style="">00:14, 02/14/2016

Yellowfang (Alt. MC) - For Approval
yell fang. thanks to David for the lineart. <span style="">22:10, 02/13/2016

Hate to be that person, but since the alternate rogue of this same coloring doesn't have texture, I really don't think it's appropriate for this one to, since alts do need to match, I believe.

oh her muzzle has to be altered slightly too since that was from the previous version (i think) so I'll send that to you. 22:41, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

'Reuploaded oops, I forgot to remove the texture. Also, thank you David! <span style="">00:11, 02/14/2016

Um the muzzle looks to triangular could you round it slightly <span style="">22:22, 14/2/16

Thrushpelt (WC) (MC) ~ For Approval
this is frustrating me so I'm just gonna post it and fix things up later 19:31, February 14, 2016 (UTC)

Sandstorm (MC) - For Approval
When I went to name her file I typed Sandstove. so she's now Sandstove <span style="">20:16, 02/14/2016