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Unknown Residents Blanks ~ For Approval
These were fun! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:48, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

I'll fix the other image on my next upload and thicken the lineart. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 01:52, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

On the shorthaired blank, perhaps just round off the tail tip? or make the fur tips on the tailtip pointier, it doesn't look quite right the way it is.

Maybe make the -> front paw a little more pronounced? Not exactly sure on how it would look but I think it should be sticking out a little more at that angle. I'm assuming that it looks the same on the shorthaired blank so fix it on both blanks. 03:37, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Am I the only one who just sees a gray box when it comes to the short-furred blank?

You're not, but i commented saying I'll fix it on my next upload. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:45, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

For the head, can you lengthen the bottom a bit and make more of a mouth, and then the chin? 07:51, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

It's actually the muzzle itself. I just had the cat look down, so the chin, I don't think, is there. It's the top of the muzzle. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 07:55, January 7, 2018 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart

I think the right (our right) front leg is thinner than the left one. Even them out? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:48, January 11, 2018 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I'll fix the thickened lineart later and add fur to the elbow. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:51, January 13, 2018 (UTC)

is it possible to maybe make the longhair tails a bit fluffier since theyre supposed to be longhaired after all 07:31, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe lengthen the extended paw?

What do you mean lengthen? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 17:44, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Make the leg longer; right now it kind of looks disproportionate. (but that could be just me)

Is the front leg on our right suppose to be bent or straight? I'm thinking bent. If so cats tend to stick their elbows up almost into their ribcage like this. So a cat crouching like that would have the elbow inside the lines that make the body. This would also help with how the leg looks a little shorter than the rest. 16:35 Tue Jan 16 2018 16:35, January 16, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe make the back on the long-haired blank more fluffy? 21:06, January 17, 2018 (UTC)

Crop the shorthair blank to the lineart (I think the longhair already is) Also there's a line on <- front leg near the head that I don't think is supposed to be there

The right (our right) front leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

I haven't forgotten about this! I shall tweak them on my next upload later! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 03:14, January 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:32, January 22, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the -> back leg on the short-haired blank more bent than the long-haired blank's? If that's the case, could you make the long-haired blank's leg more like the short-haired blank? 20:43, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

They're the same thing, it's just fluffy on the long-haired blank. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:03, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the line I commented about earlier is still there, so I'll circle it, as well as a few other lines. I can see that the lines are all in the whisker area, but they don't seem to connect anywhere on the head, which is why I think they're out of place, and they aren't on the shorthair, but they don't look like fluff. And finally, the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

the front of the hind leg also looks a little thin around the lineart, as does the all paws. 05:03, January 27, 2018 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo had said they were out of town, and experiencing some family issues. I don't think they've returned yet, but even if the Still Working goes by 24 hours, it shouldn't be declined, because it wouldn't be fair to Cosmo if she's not here to work on it. <span style="">02:29, 2/03/2018

Blanks are exempt from the one week/one month ruling. These won't be delcined, and Cosmo came to me and let me know about her activity. These will stay up.

I am home from out of town, but still family issues are going on and now my computer in sai isn't letting me save any files for some reason, even though I shut it down and stuff. I'm still trying to get back on and tweak these blanks, but I'm sorry for the inactivity. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, February 3, 2018 (UTC)

It's all good, Cosmo. Thanks for updating us!

I should be uploading in the next day or two! Hopefully by saturday or tomorrow night. Sorry about not uploading in a while. Also, i got a new tablet for desktop, so that's good. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:44, February 9, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps thicken the lines on the ears and back a little bit? It might just be my eyes, but it seems a bit thin. <span style="">18:03 Sun Feb 11

Re-uploaded. WOO! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:42, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

<- Front leg looks a lot thicker than -> front leg. Also the lines around -> whiskers/leg look kind of messy on the shorthair, and a little messy on <- whiskers/fluff on longhair. The longhair's tail is at a different angle than the shorthair's, and my only other concern is that the shorthair and longhair blanks don't match up but I don't know if that's even a requirement

Could you make the ears just a little more pointed? 20:58, February 16, 2018 (UTC)

idiot me above said the wrong leg: right (our right) back leg kind of looks awkwardly positioned, so maybe make it look like this?

The left front leg looks too thin. Even with the angle difference, the front legs should still carry the same weight, if that makes sense. I can give a red line if it would make what I mean clearer. <span style="">12:40 Thu Mar 1

maybe make the fluffy bits on the side of the face of the longhaired a bit smaller, like right now they seem a lil big if u know what I mean? not reducing it, though. 18:42, March 1, 2018 (UTC)

Are you still working Cosmo? Not going to decline this, just checking on ya.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:57, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

Yes, I am. Things been shitty lately. But they should be uploaded again soon... <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:41, March 11, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 01:49, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

I'm gonna change the hind leg again! :u Any redlines will help too. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 04:45, March 15, 2018 (UTC)

I think you should make the line on the <= ear disconnect from the outline, so it doesn't look too thin, if you know what I mean. Just a bit similar to the other ear. And maybe alter the middle tuft on the long-haired tailtip a little? It could be just me, but it looks almost like another paw. I love this blank so much ughhh ><!!

These are turning out very nice! Maybe make the lineart on bottoms of the left front paw and back paws a tiny bit thicker? 22:31, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Softpaw (VS) (Ki) ~ For Approval
hey. im back. she's a little plain but im happy --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Pretty! Darken the shading and add some on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 06:57, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a little. Cute! <span style="">07:00, 3/21/2018

Aaaaaaand re-uploaded! --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Smooth out the shading and define it on the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 07:54, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That took me about 5 minutes of really intense blurring but I think I did it???

haha oops forgot my signature --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Could you perhaps define the light on the top half of the tail? Also, with the light source that it seems like you're aiming for, I'm not sure there should be any shading crossing all the way across the front legs; it'd just shade the legs on the > side if you know what I mean

Maybe smooth out the shading around the chest a little? 14:33, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, maybe a bit in <-- ear too? 22:26, March 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Patch, I don't have any shading for the <- ear because of my light source. Do you mean the -> ear? --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

I've seen shading in the ear with this source before, I do it sometimes with my images too, but it's not needed. Up to you if you want to add it. Define the shading depth on both the legs and back paw. 13:08, March 22, 2018 (UTC)

The shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart. <span style="">16:36, 3/22/2018

Expand the shading on the tail and define it on the legs more? c: <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:11, March 23, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'll get rid of all the excess shading on the -> paw next upload, okay? --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Add some light on the > front leg, and maybe make the tail shading stretch further down to the base, if you know what I mean

Re-uploaded. No I'm fairly sure I didn't know what you meant but I tried. --  You  <span title="If I learn Burning Hands, can I use my middle fingers to cast it?"> lose   <span title="This guy&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' s one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you&#039;re... attacking the boat?" data-rte-attribs=" title=This guy's one of the deadliest sorcerors around and you're... attacking the boat?"&gt; one HP.​

Could you smooth out the shading on the body and tail a bit more? 21:38, March 24, 2018 (UTC)

Could you remove the shading along the front leg? With the way the light hits, that side shouldn't be shaded.

Still working? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 02:24, March 30, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yeet --

Can you define the shading on the legs and tail, and maybe darken it a little more on the > front leg?

Define the shading depth a little too, particularly on the head and chest. 00:37, April 2, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

Define the shading depth just a little on right front leg. 00:18, April 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

Could you define the light on the top half of the tail on the < side, and maybe darken it a smidge there and on the > front leg?

I don't know if it's just me, but the apprentice version looks a bit lighter? It may just be me, though. 03:32, 4/02/2018 ​

Re-uploaded. I think it's fine, Comet. I gave the file to Spooky myself, and the kit was actually posted first. So yeah, it's alright. Also, Spooks, what do you mean by "define the light"? --

I meant make the light more visible on the top half of the tail, as the top tip/half looks like it's in shading all the way across, when really < side shouldn't have shading with this source. Light goes >> way and shading goes on >> side if you know what I mean

i tried --

Velvet (VS) (KP) ~ For Approval
(totally didn't have this made way ahead of time) I LUV GRAY CATS

Smokehaze (W) ~ For Approval
*wants rof desperately* *debating life decisions* *kill me now*

Eaglepaw (A) ~ For Approval
All colors from kit. Comments? 00:24, April 10, 2018 (UTC)

Are there eyelashes? <span style="">00:29, 4/10/2018