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Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone
Ima try this, trolololol Skt Like a baws  00:47, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt Like a baws  00:41, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Stunningly awesome <3 8DD Blur the leg shading and shoulder shading and blur the pale chest :3 00:59, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, lovely shield brother 8D -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  02:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Redone
Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3  03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.) 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. 12:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink and blur them higlights. x3  21:24, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste below the stomach. 21:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tear the ear. 03:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots more. 18:24, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... I'm gonna have a huge quitter moment but a) I hate this image, b) my blur tool won't blur the shading anymore, c) this'll take me much longer then the two week timespan d) I hate this image! So I'm withdrawing this. Anyone who wants this may have it. 23:55, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this. :3 02:12, 28, 04, 2012

Make the earpink more red. 00:11, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded -  Meh, this is a fail. And Sunnyfrost, if someone has volenteered to take over an image and they haven't uploaded yet, please don't comment. 02:07, 29, 04, 2012

Blur the mid-shading a bit, and get rid of the white specks on the tail and front paw. 04:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add the torn ear. 00:46 Mon Apr 30

Reuploaded -  -dies- Ew this image. Oh and I'll soon fix that black line from the tail to the haunch. x| 05:28, 30, 04, 2012

<3 Darken and blur the shading. 21:13, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :O How can you like it?! D'awww Thanks. I hate the shading on this. >:/ 07:16, 03, 05, 2012

How could you not like this? Blur the belly shading~ 09:55, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Alt. Ki) ~ Redone
Shading issues. First and only OA was Mistfire. Changes are probably not showing. 22:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and if needed maybe lighten up the base color a tad? :/ 06:51, 27, 04, 2012

Define the eye depth. 07:27, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Knock knock  12:36, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry if the first image looked dark. I had no idea where the base color was on her old image @_@. 23:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 15:34, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink more pink and the nose black/dark gray. 18:09, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The nose looks black, but it's a very dark gray. 22:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It's very very hard to see the earpink on the right ear (our right). Define it some. 00:12, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

She looks more black than dark gray, in my opinion. Lighten her up. 13:58, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uh..she's supposed to be black. This is her alt kit. Skt Knock knock  03:44, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:14, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 02:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

'Reuploaded  20:47, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (D) ~ Redone
Okay I know this was origanally supposed to be a tweak, but in chat Cloudy said that if it was impossible to tweak it could be a redo, not sure if this is what she meant but this is how I did it and if you want me to just tweak it then I will. But the shading needed to be fixed, the scars needed to be redone, and the earpink didn't match. The OA was... Scarletwind I think. 19:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a bit. 20:32, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 22:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. 00:13, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

And define it. ^^ 01:07, 29, 04, 2012

Define the shading. 13:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/shoulder shading a bit more. 09:57, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:11, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink.... 22:09, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights." 00:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (W) ~ Redone
Redone for the same reasons as the leader. OA is Insaneular. Skt Knock knock 03:55, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

I defined the sahding, cause i hated it. Skt Knock knock 03:57, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the muzzle. 17:08, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 00:14, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink's fine. 03:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the muzzle shading is fine, but if anyone else wants me to, I'll do it. Skt Knock knock  00:06, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it a little. 21:49, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading a bit? This is awesome. <3 01:30, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

And define that tail shading~ 11:41, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Ki) ~ Redone
The shading and earpink needed to be redone. I know that the pelt color is darker. I'll fix it in the next upload. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:12, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and is the nose supposed to be dark gray? Can't remember if that goes with gray cats >.<  22:31, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It should be grey regardless, his apprentice has a grey one. Skt Knock knock  23:02, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 00:51, 29, 04, 2012

Re-Ups^ :S

Define the neck shading a little? 20:17 Sun Apr 29

Define the tail shading. :3 01:32, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur ---> the shading on that side of the cat some. 10:42, 02, 05, 2012

Um... This is way too dark. Lighten him up a lot. 11:24, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^. 20:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Insaneular (I think), and it needed to match. Comments? 20:09, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken out some stripes. <span style="">04:54, 30, 04, 2012

I think it's my browser, but define the earpink some more. 21:47, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded yesterday I forgot to say it yesterday. And the earpink matches the warrior and apprentice, so I won't change it. 01:09, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to thicken out a few stripes to match. <span style="">06:33, 01, 05, 2012

Blur the ear pink a tiny bit and there's a bit of waste under him. 23:22, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:54, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (W) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows. Redone to match the deputy and elder, I believe. Comments? This matches so bad ;.; Yes I know I forgot the tufted ears...I'll add them later. ene  <span style="">21:11, 04 29, 2012

Nice ^^ Define the neck shading. 21:16 Sun Apr 29

Re-uploaded. Tufted ears. -dies- <span style="">22:44, 04 29, 2012

This still needs to match more. Lessen the black and make the tabby pattern match. :/ <span style="">04:46, 30, 04, 2012

Swiftpaw (A) - Redone
OA was Dawnfeather with a redo by Splook with the new blanks. He looked more mottled/spotted rather then actually black and white and the shading needed to be darkened. I'm rusty on my black and white cats... Comments? 03:07, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the dorsal whiteness (meaning the white on his back)? 03:41, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Also, I found out black cats with white-tipped tails are actually not as common as you'd think. You don't have to get rid of it, but it'd be nice to see the percentage of black cats with white tipped tails to go down to coincide with how commonly it's seen. Wonderful btw <3  21:40, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I kinda want to keep the white tail-tip. 22:50, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, but blur it on the haunch. Breeze whisker  04:32, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) - Redone
I personally like this version better. OA was me, at least the latest one was, and I didnt like the stripes, and it just overall looked bad...Comments?<333 01:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes just a bit. Nice job Twee~ 09:48, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit smaller. -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Purty.~ 15:11, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) ~ Tweaked
He needed a fluffy tail :3 Latest OA was Iceheart22. Changes probably aren't showing. I feel it needs to be floofier... 23:56, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it needs to be more floofier and possibly a tad spikier. <span style="">10:30, 02, 05, 2012

Also, make the lineart a bit thicker, if you can keep the floof<3 11:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh my word...I killed his tail ;.;  20:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

some of the floofy parts looks blockisk, make it...less blockish? i don't know how to phrase that owo -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  01:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Those are more likely the spiky parts x3. I'll fix that though. 10:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Socks (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Mumble785, and needed to be redone to match the loner/kittypet images. I'm not smudging the paws (or extending the white, for that matter) anymore then they are, since the lineart //is// smaller.....

Define the darpink. :3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Like a baws 21:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, too~ 22:07, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the smudges on the muzzle just a smidge? 22:08, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Runningwind (Ki) ~ Redone
The changes aren't showing possibly... >.< Yayyy. I did his apprentice, so I did his kit too. The reason for the redo is to make him look like his warrior. Shaf Girl was the OA. I used all the original colours of the stripes, base, and eyes, so don't ask me to change the colour. Comments, questions, concerns? 05:58, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Earpink? <span style="">07:01, 03, 05, 2012

Oh wow. I'm a dork. Reuploaded. 07:15, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Silverstream (Ki) ~ Redone
Kit spree~! 8D I did her queen, so I had all the colours... just like Runningwind. So don't ask me to change the stripes, base, or eyes. Love you guys. <3 OA was Twi. Readon is to make her like her warrior.~ Comments, questions, concerns? 07:39, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Longtail (E) - Redone
Misty's reservation expired. Copied the stripes from the old image exactly. Shading was blotchy. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire, and Sandstar. Colors are from the apprentice .xcf. Comments? 19:20, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (E) - Redone
Not completely sure who the OA on this one was.... Wildfire I think. But it needed to match the apprentice, so here we go. Comments? 19:22, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, and she needed sliced ears. I know, this would make her ears kinda...spaghetti-like, but this is how I imagined it in my mind how Hawkfrost would have ripped them. I added scars to her hears but they're kinda hard to see. 19:41, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think that the ear that is closest to us would have just been sliced off if it actually looked like that... Can you tone it down a tad? 19:46, May 3, 2012 (UTC)