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Darktail (Lo) - Tweaked
i have reappeared from my hiatus temporarily to make this and i am very very very rusty so please forgive me 23:50, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

It doesn't look like that one spot on the back of his leg goes down that far on the other images? 23:57, 7/22/2017 it's a different side, doesn't matter 23:59, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

That seemed a little rude to me, please take into consideration anothers feelings before being so blunt k? 00:01, 7/23/2017

I was just stating a fact, I didn't intend to be rude. I don't see how that comes across as rude, but okay 00:04, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

The intent for this pattern was that it was only supposed to be a small amount. Could you shrink that leg patch that Winter is talking about? This is too much black and contradicts the pattern that David has set for him. Also, since this is yours, could you smooth out the shading on the stomach?

Reuploaded 14:43, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Why did you darken the shading? It was fine as it was before 14:50, 7/23/2017

if one's got the file and wants to alter it I won't really bregrudge them, but now it's too dark and he looks grey. 15:53, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

can u also smooth the shading out everywhere? 20:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yup, if someone has the file, then there's really no issues here... and since I'd already asked Cinder to modify the shading, I think it was appropriate that she also fix anything else she found fault with.

the darkened shading was an accident, just needed to see it better to smooth it out. reuploading 02:18, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

The face looks really gray

The shading is still too dark 02:36, 7/24/2017

it was approved like this, but okay??? 18:49, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Ik it was approved like this, as you said, but I agree with Danny that the face does look really gray. The shading couldn't hurt to be lightened as winter mentioned either, imo, and we may as well since it's up for tweak

actually, im sorry but i disagree that the shading is too dark. i can see the texture and color through it and it doesn't influence the image negatively. 02:53, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

I still stand by my gray face statement, but I also agree that the darkness of the shading is fine.

Could you possibly add a highlight or two to the face and see how it looks? If it doesn't appeal to you, then you can keep the shading as it is. These blanks have such a small facial area and it's not the easiest to work with, so I totally understand. Also, if anyone tries to delcine this once it reaches the one week mark, please do not. We've been bickering about the shading for the last few days and that wouldn't be fair to Cinder.

I don't think the nose is filled in. :) 06:04, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Winter.. this blank doesn't allow you to fill in the nose

Yes, it does. There's one small pixel for nose pink/color.

Oh. I thought that was an optional thing. I've seen images that don't have it filled in. Sorry :P

This is getting ridiculous. Reuploaded 19:03, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, and it seems like it is leaking on the stomach. 02:04, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste underneath the chin. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 06:45, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

Pebbleheart (ES) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to be darker. I love this pose XD Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:29, August 1, 2017 (UTC)

i think he could be a little bit darker. could you also define the shading on the white? i can barely see it. 12:48, August 1, 2017 (UTC)

ReuploadStealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:26, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there should be chest stripes on the white to match the kit?

There is it's just slightly hidden by the long-furred lineart.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  20:59, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

I see it now. The stripes on the farthest back leg appear to be a different color than the rest of the stripes?

Hey Stealth, I hate to be that person, but..the stripes don't really match the MC at all. The stripes are thinner and smoother and aren't as jagged as you have them. Plus these are a little too paint brushy to match 02:29, 8/03/2017

Actually the mc would have to match this due to the mc blanks being redone

Uh, no. Scarlet holds the rights to this pattern. The ES was meant to match the old MC. The warrior was still there up until not too long ago. Stealth was still required to match the other images prior. That doesn't change.

Jake (Ro) ~ Redone
Here's Jakey! Redone to match stripes. The most recent OA was Pikachushinx. All colors from other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:01, August 3, 2017 (UTC)

Which image did you get the colors from? The kittypet is the master image in this set, and I feel your image is a bit too red to match...

Here is the color differences between my image and the kittypet. I guess some color is off, but it could also be the shading because I used a purple-ish tint. http://prntscr.com/g3pd15 http://prntscr.com/g3pde9 But I'll go fix the colors. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:15, August 3, 2017 (UTC)

Hmm, it's definitely the tint, then. Also, the stripes don't really match the pattern the kittypet has at all. These are thinner and straighter, while the kittypet's are loosely based on Firestar's pattern and have a jagged shape to them. Not sure why no one's been matching that, but shrugs. Different sides are one thing, but this (it's a nice pattern and I do like it) doesn't match the pattern I had set at all.

'''Re-uploaded. ''' Changed the stripes to more jagged. Hope this is a better match to the kittypet. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:27, August 3, 2017 (UTC)

I think the kittypet's are still more jagged than this.

For lack of better words, the kittypet's pelt seems to have more of the base color showing through than this does in it's pattern

can you make the nick smaller, it looks more like a chunk was ripped off 18:51, August 3, 2017 (UTC)

Pretty sure the nick should be on the other side of the ear

'''Re-uploaded. ''' I changed the color of shading to view everything better and not so blended in. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:34, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MC) - Tweaked
For black tail-tip. OA is Paleclaw, tweaked by Burnt, redone by shinx, tweaked by me.

Spottedleaf (Star) - Tweaked
Same as above. (i'll reupload to remove eyelashes in a second)

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