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Jackdaw's Cry (Star) ~ CBA
Yay. :3 Comments?

Define/darken the shading, and could you smudge it so that it flows with the fur? Those are some really amazing eyes. 16:39 Thu Jun 12

Smudging the shading isn't mandatory. =/ Idk what everyone's thing is with smudging but not everyone does it

No, that's not it. I can clearly see that the shading is smudged, so I'm only suggesting that it be smudged in the way of the fur. ;) 18:07 Thu Jun 12

Add the texture. It's a bit faint, but it is there. 19:12, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay then. It doesn't look smudged to me but whatever. o.O

Re-up ~ I thought nobody would see I smudged the shading a little bit, but oh well. XD I'm not really good at smudging shading so I added a very thin layer of highlight and smudged that, but it's hard to see on a black cat. And Bbun, what do you mean with texture? Sorry, I'm from the Netherlands so my English may not be really good. ^_^"

As in, the dark black "stripes" on his rogue. Those are texture. Please add it ^^;;. 18:16, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Hope I got what you meant. :3

Darken and define the texture. I can barely see it. 14:10, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ I tried, but I don't know if it's better now. :/

Darken the opacity on the texture - it should be slightly darker than the base coat. 18:56, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Tried again. I also added a little bit more highlight. I don't know if I do it good 'cause I never worked with texture on cats before.

Define the texture on the face, chest, and legs. 17:39, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Sorry that I'm often a bit late with it. ^^'

If he's a black cat he should have a black nose, unless his other chararts are like that. 17:14, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Made his nose black.

Define the shading some, and smudge the texture a bit to match the rogue. 18:23, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Yup.

Darken/define the shading summore and this will be good. 14:14, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Darkened the shading. I hope the edges aren't too dark. ^^

Actually, blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch, below the head, and a teeny bit on the shoulder/chest area. 14:12, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the texture jusssst a tiny bit. 17:59 Thu Jul 3

Re-up ~ Blurred the mentioned places. c: And Hawk, do I have to lighten the highlights or the texture stripes?

The texture. A slide of 5 or 6 on the opacity bar should do the trick. 22:43 Fri Jul 4

Is the nose pure black? I think it has to be, since he's a black cat. Daaamn, this is really pretty and I love it *.*

I tried with the texture, but I don't see any difference. :/ The texture stripes are already quite transparent, so it's hard to lighten it. And the nose is black with thin layer of highlight. Do I have to remove the highlight?

Nope. I didn't know it was a highlight. It's fine as it is, and we're gonna go CBA on this because it's super pretty and I like it, and I think it's a job well done.

Thank you! ^^ sorry for the late comments...

Frostfur (Q) - For Approval
- All colors came from her star clan 01:41, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the tail shading. 13:36, June 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:14, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Define the highlights on the belly.

Re-uploaded 14:57, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Don't darken but define the shading a touch 23:23, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:25, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define it more on her front legs? 01:26, June 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the belly shading Brick  10:14, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:07, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on her tail seems gray. Just lighten it a tiny bit. 18:00 Thu Jul 3

I think blurring the shading might actually fix that. Instead of lightening it, try to smooth the transition between the shading and where it stops. I've done that before and it seems to have worked out pretty well before.

Re-uploaded 15:10, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Snowbird(Q) - For Approval
love dat name does anyone remember snow bird from dr quinn medicine woman? 18:36, June 23, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and blur it a lot.

Define the light source on the face. 17:52 Wed Jun 25

re-uplaoded 04:05, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more on the belly.

re-uploaded 21:34, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the face shading. 18:57, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

re-uplaoded 23:01, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the facial shading a bit and blur the body shading.

re-uploaded' 15:24, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

If you use highlights, would you object to adding a small one on the chest? I'm having a hard time telling apart the shading from the base. If your source means that this area wouldn't be as bright, then disregard my comment.

re-uploaded 20:19, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Possibly move the facial shading to <-- of the face, since the tail shading is suggesting that your light source is coming from the --->. It just seems a bit off.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:29, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 14:11, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Queen) ~ For Approval
She needed a queen image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:03, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Please use File:Ashfoot.queen.png to upload. The image needs to be named as such so it works properly with the charart template. Also try and give a little bit more shape to the facial shading and define the light on the tail.

'''Re-up. '''Sorry Snow. Uploaded it to that file, Shaped the facial shading, also darkened the shading on her legs and added the light on her tail.

If the changes arent showing up, go here: http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Ashfoot.queen.png~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:22, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

If changes aren't showing, ezimba.com is a good site. 15:48, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. Those eyes are amazing. *.* 17:51 Wed Jun 25

Re-up. Defined light on her legs. Better? Not sure if changes are showing.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:47, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit.

Re-up. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:21, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on the hind legs, and add some depth to the facial shading. 22:07, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Defined shading and light on her legs, and added depth to her face shading. Is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:34, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on that one hind leg furthest from us - there'd be light there - and there is shading receding from the side of the face. 14:13, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined light on the hind leg farthest from us, and removed shading that was leaking away from the face.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:15, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Dawncloud (Star) ~ For Approval
ew; look here for changes; colours are from the kit image. 16:01, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Try making the back stripe curve more. As in, the one that runs along her spine. An example of this can be seem on Hawk Swoop's StarClan image. 16:06, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Sorrel, this is honestly an amazing charart. Love those eyes *.* 17:00 Wed Jun 25

Reups changes obrigado~

Define the shading on the face. 20:40, June 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 15:30, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

this may be impossible but can you define the earpink in his left ear? 16:17, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Reups you mean 'her' c: 19:17, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us. Amazing charart :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:35, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reups thank you very much ;) 21:21, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face a bit. 16:57, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 21:21, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:35, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

If you're using the source I'm thinking you are, Sorrel, I don't think there'd be any shading on the elbow on this arm.. At least, that's what I was told when I started using it. Perhaps erase that part? Plus doing that looks really neat for some reason

Reups that was a mistake; I never noticed it. 10:01, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Ryestalk (Q) - For Approval
Here we go. All colourpicked from the warrior image. Leafstrike Talk  22:53, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Curcle the stripes on the back leg closest to us some. 22:57, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  23:21, June 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the belly and tail. 16:16 Fri Jun 27

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  00:58, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit? 15:38, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

I think it looks fine to me. Leafstrike Talk  22:00, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna slide in here and agree with Sorrel. Could you also try and blur the edges of the stripes on a really low setting. That's what I did for the warrior. ^^

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  05:08, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the shoulder facing us. 18:02 Thu Jul 3

Reuploaded. Leafstrike  Talk  00:01, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:30, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

I think the light on the tail is fine. 22:16, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sunfish (Q) ~ For Approval
So like, apparently you can have a redone queen AND something else for approval now? I did not know this. Buuut here. All colors from the Warrior.

If I messed this up in any way feel free to shoot me Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:46, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on all four legs. 16:57, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define tail and belly shading. Brick 19:10, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

lighten her up a bit 23:21, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Shinxy Blitz and Melody 07:46, June 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on that hind leg furthest to us - there'd be ligh tni that position. 14:12, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:46, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit, and perhaps make the light on the belly a little more visible? Ah, I wish Sunfish had gotten more screen time, I like her. ;-;

'''Re-uploaded. '''I agree, she should have had more time V_V. In case changes don't show, have a link. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:26, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more on the belly.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:31, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Changes. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Q) - CBA
Ding. Despite me color picking, the color still feels off... so I'm gonna play with that.

Re-uploaded. Color-picked again.

hm, it doesn't look too far off but I think it's the shading color on the sharpclaw, it looks like maybe a black or very very dark red, almost black, shading x3 23:27, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

I really don't want to use black on this, though. Using black on a color like this makes it look green (like the other one is starting to look) and I think the sharpclaw needs tweaking for flat shading anyways.. idk, but I really don't want to tweak the color on the shading. I thought tint didn't have to match? idk

oh oops, I didn't mean for you to change anything, you just said that the color feels off, and I wanted to help? sorry, I didn't clarify 23:32, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, it's fine. I thought you were asking me to change it. I color picked from like four different areas on both the queen and the sharpclaw and they all gave me around this color. I'll use black, but only if it looks that off.

define don't darken the shading on the face and her front left leg 16:20, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the chest. 14:11, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 20:07, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

So sorry, but can you blur the shading near the belly slightly, so it doesn't look blotchy? <span style="">10:09 Sun Jul 6

If I blur it, I'll get told to define it again. It's actually fairly blurred as it is, and it doesn't appear blotchy to me at all.

Gotta agree with Skye here; it doesn't look blotchy. Back to a CBA, I guess? 14:57, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Birdflight (Q) - For Approval
The shading could use some work, but I'm pretty happy with the striping. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:09, June 29, 2014 (UTC)

define the overall shading 02:04, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Defined - ish. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:48, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

This is neat. .o. Darken the overall shading.

Darkened. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:50, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the leg shading a bit. 17:15, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her front legs, and on her face.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:59, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:38, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading some more. This is also pretty by the way :3 13:59, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Tail shading has been blurred. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 15:15, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Does the chest area have shading? I can't tell. Also darken only the belly shading, if you don't mind.

Chest has been shaded, and the belly darkened a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:33, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna ask you to darken the shading again, I'm so sorry. ;-; This time, only the head/facial shading. I'm seriously so sorry for constantly asking you to darken the shading omg

Nah, it's fine. :) Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 20:31, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Falling Feather (Star) ~ For Approval
I really like the purple shading. All pelt colors from the rogue image. It is quite a shame she died. Why are all of the good characters dying argh <span style="">1:45 Mon Jun 30

can you expand the unshaded areas? 02:03, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face a tad. bootiful  Brick   10:13, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Try making the texture match the rogue more. I recommend asking Scar for the file for the rogue. 14:59, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm not happy with this. Thank you. <span style="">15:28 Mon Jun 30

as it is now, the way the shading is smudged makes her looks kinda mottled, can you fix that? 16:19, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is this better? <span style="">16:53 Mon Jun 30

The texture kinda looks like stripes... That's actually what I thought they were at first.

Re-uploaded. This is as much as I can do without making it look like stripes. <span style="">16:21 Thu Jul 3

could you possibly lighten the shading a bit or lessen it or something? everytime i scroll past it she looks almost more purple than white 23:30, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">1:42 Sat Jul 5

the shading around her eye, is very big and makes it look as if her eyes are sunken in. it also makes the color thrown off, so can you possibly lessen it just a bit. 22:18, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Star) ~ CBA
He needed a starclan image. Colorpicked from his Medicine cat image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:53, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Next time, please wait until someone archives your previous image before posting a new one. As for this one, define the shading and darken it.

Don't the whiskers need to be longer? Brick 10:23, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe just a few pixels longer. 15:36, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Made whiskers a few more pixels longer and darkened/defined the shading. Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:42, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define and add some depth to the shading. Nice! 14:16, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Defined and added depth to his shading. is that better? and thank you, Bbun :).~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:56, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and forelegs. <span style="">19:04 Wed Jul 2

Re-up. Defined the light on his tail and forelegs. is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:53, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, could you perhaps darken his base pelt by about a shade or two? This appears to be slightly lighter than his MC. Other than that, this is looking pretty stellar. Well done, Breezeheart. =)

Re-uploaded. It wasnt his base coat; it was his highlights making him look a bit paler. I turned the opacity down a bit. Is that better? And thank you Snow; that means alot. :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Yup! That looks much better, dear. =3 Just define the shading on his visible paws, and I think this'll be pretty good to go.

Re-uploaded. Defined the shading on his front paws. Thank you :3--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:17, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

As I said, let's go CBA with this. It looks really really good and I know the CBA is well-deserved.

Sorryy to interrupt, but just define his facial shading some, since I can see a bit leaking from his face, and this can go back on CBA. 14:02, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined his facial shading, and removed the shading that was leaking away from his face.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 19:51, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Back to a CBA, then? 19:53, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
Just colorpicked from Paleh's, but brightened that muzzle up. Comments? 16:55, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her face a tad bit more? Also, maybe lighten the shading a tiny bit, It looks rather dark.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:58, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

re-up I'll leave the shading darkness as-is unless told to by someone else, as it'd make her look flat. 19:10, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source on the face. Maybe getting rid of that line beside the <<< eye (our left) would help. Dem eyes tho *.* <span style="">18:06 Thu Jul 3

I think it's fine. The line is the shading for the cat's cheekbone, I believe, so it'd be there while parts of the face are in light. 18:10, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

thin it out some, her cheekbone wouldn't have that big of a shadow 03:19, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 03:37, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading, or smudge it, whichever you use. It appears to end quite abruptly. Also, lightening it by a few percents on the opacity bar probably wouldn't hurt, but that's your choice if you want to do it or not.

re-up smudged where it was needed 14:43, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit? 21:00, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

(this is not a case of 'I don't want to do anything' okay) Ahh I think it's fine, unless someone else agrees, and on what parts, specifically? 21:02, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

I think the facial shading could use a bit of blurring, or something like that, to perhaps make the transitions and areas where the light hit a bit softer. I also think the front legs, moreso <-- one, could use a little bit of blurring. Also, given your source (at least I think I'm reading this right), wouldn't the chest area have slightly darker shading in places (like right under the neck), due to it being the furthest from the light? See, I'm learning.

re-up 22:21, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading a bit on the face 22:19, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Tangleburr (A) ~ For Approval
Uuuughhh, the markings and texture were annoying. Especially the texture. I've never done texture before- I had to guess. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:09, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Did you get the file from Berry? If not, I strongly recommend it. 17:11, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

No, I colorpicked from the Warrior. I'll go ask for the file ^_^ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and light.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:19, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the colors on this match well enough. Defining the light and shading like Breezeheart suggested might fix the colors not quite looking exactly the same.

'''Re-uploaded. '''I hate shading apprentices so much o_o

In case changes don't show, here. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:19, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

curve the haunch texture a bit. 22:20, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (A) - For Approval
i like this comments? 18:19, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make his markings look more fish-like? 18:30, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

well, i tried already, this is a pike. that's what i tried to base this off of, and in other images the spots are bigger, basically there's not to great of a consistent pattern in the mottles in northern pikes, which is what i want to base this off of because of his name. 18:35, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make them vary in size, though? I love pike and it's kinda cool we got his gender confirmed

Blur the shadong some? <span style="">22:05, 07/1/2014

Re-uploaded I didn't erase any of the mottles I had but i added a new layer and added smaller mottles in a new layer 22:57, July 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">18:07 Thu Jul 3

Define the facial shading.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 14:13, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Swiftbreeze (Q) ~ For Approval
Meh. <span style="">23:28 Wed Jul 2

The white is looking very gray, especially on the tail tip and paws. 23:32, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">1:08 Thu Jul 3

Still looks pretty gray imho. Also blur the stripes just a little bit.

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:47 Thu Jul 3

Her belly looks gray.. lighten that up a bit?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:18, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:46 Fri Jul 4

seriously people there's shading on her, of course she's gonna look a bit gray. e.e Beautiful work, Hawk, just define the shading on her legs 23:26, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you for your support, duck. <span style="">1:41 Sat Jul 5

Yes, Duck, but there comes a point where the shading is too dark on some places. Define the light and shading on her tail. Looks great, Hawk :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:09, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I'm just gonna say that yes, it can look gray, but it is more than possible to shade white and still have it look white. There's no need for "e.e" or something like that, so knock it off instead of acting annoyed when a critique is offered. If you believe it's fine, then respectfully decline the critique. The emotes which imply you're pretty annoyed is unnecessary- doesn't matter if you agree or disagree- we're supposed to be getting along, and Breezeheart is correct. There are times where sometimes the shading is just too dark- but that is a matter of opinion and artist's style, which the whole point of PCA is to bring together those styles to make art..not to bicker about whether or not something is right or wrong. Yes, the belly is gray, but I was talking more about the paws in my comment, which would have some light on them. I also know some people use off-white, which also contributes to it looking grayer than normal.

Re-uploaded. Hmm, I used pure white, and I am using black shading. I can't really do much to it without throwing off the light source and/or making it seem flat. I think that tinted shading, however, would disrupt the balance of the colors. Any suggestions? <span style="">19:17 Sat Jul 5

Tint the shading a little more red, which won't throw off your red-based brown, and lighten it a touch. See how that works and then we can see where it goes from there. :) 22:14, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Leggy, for the suggestion. That actually helped. <span style="">1:45 Sun Jul 6

I think the tint did the trick, honestly. That looks much better now. ^^

Define the facial shading a tad?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:36, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think it's fine. I'll change it if someone else agrees. <span style="">6:52 Sun Jul 6

I'm with Breezeheart on this one. Just a tiiiiny bit, though. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:32, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">18:20 Mon Jul 7

Molepaw (Star) - For Approval
Hello. Molepaw is adorable.

Shouldn't there be a bit more grey on his paws, like on his kit and apprentice? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 23:30, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I misunderestimated how much gray were on his paws. =P

Define the light on his tail a bit?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:12, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Possibly smudge the earpink into the fur a bit more?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:56, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

It's actually smudged quite a fair bit, but I tried something different this time to give it some variety.

Define the light on the paw farthest away from us? All im seeing is the shading.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:04, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

There's light there. It's not blindingly obvious, but it's there. If someone else agrees, I'll reupload when I get home.

Snowy (Q) - For Approval
Hey there. I like this very much. / Changes here if needed 23:47, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source. Also, the shading on the belly and hind legs seems quite gray. <span style="">23:50 Thu Jul 3

Question: How do you define the light source? As for the shading, I'll have that up in a moment. 23:52, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups  23:54, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Defining the light source means to make the light face the same way everywhere on the cat. So let's say that your light source in in the top right corner. Everything in shadow would be everything from the bottom left corner. Idk I'm bad at explaining. As for the shading, It wasn't that gray. Now you need to define it. Sorry for the trouble! ^-^` <span style="">2:23 Fri Jul 4

Define the light on her foreleg farthest from us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:17, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups  15:22, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front two legs. Darkness-wise, I think they're pretty good, but they could use some slight definition. She's looking good, Rocket. Keep up the amazing work.

Re-Ups Thank you, Jayce :)  14:39, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading near the belly is a bit blotchy- blur it. This is good .o. <span style="">21:24 Sat Jul 5

Re-Up  21:28, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
ew, I know. My first dapples, and I'm not entirely impressed. Changes be here 15:28, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 16:55, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes aren't showing yet 21:24, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

blur the dapples a bit. Also, possibly lighten them a tad to match the kit, apprentice, and warrior, that's up to you though. 23:28, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

I'm having a difficult time seeing the ear pink in --> ear. Mind shifting some shading around a bit so I can see it?

Reups changes 14:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her front legs.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:36, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 10:00, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Fallowfern (Q) - For Approval
Hey. 15:53, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and light on her legs. 15:54, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 16:04, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the belly shading, and darken it while you're at it.

IDK if it's necessary, but add some shading around her shoulder, too? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:29, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups. I'll add shading around the shoulder if someone else asks me to. It looks okay to me, but, then again, I'm a newbie 14:43, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, go ahead and do that. I think you'd need it with your source anyways.

Re-Ups I really hope it's shaped okay. This image is actually really, /really/ fun. 15:06, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Remove that bit of shading right by the chest since it doesn't belong there. And you might want to get a second opinion on this, but can you define the earpink a bit? Also blur the stomach shading a tad. 16:34, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. Ehhhhhhh... okay. The earpink is under the shading layers, I'll re-do it if someone else agrees, mainly because it took a few tries to get them right without seemind, well, neon-ish. also the shading is strange on her leg i know but that's the only way I could include the shoulder and not the chest. 17:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

By shoulder I meant that line between the belly and the head, but okay... Darken the shading on the legs slightly, maybe? And there's waste by her chest. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 18:57, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Better? I've got 13 layers of shading on this one cat... how did this happen? 20:42, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading; also, define the earpink a bit. i can barely see it, especially in the <--- ear.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:37, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups. I moved the earpink so it was above all the shading. 14:03, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her tail 22:44, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (Star) - For Approval
Since the other one got declined, I figured I'd give this a go. The face shading is bugging me, but I can't figure out how to fix it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:33, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Try defining the facial shading to see if that helps. One way I've found is good is to bring the layers back down so it's just your linart, base color (no stripes if you can) and your shading. 15:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

That helped a lot, thank you. I also changed the eyes a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:03, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the paw shading a tiny bit - she's a stunner. 22:42, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Defined. :) And thanks. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 22:59, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Rosetail (Star) ~ For Approval
Finally, she's confirmed! Comments? 15:56, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the earpink in this (--->) ear. Can you define it a bit? omg dem eyes tho O.O so pretty 17:28, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Rocket here. Also, could you blur the shading directly around the lower head/neck area?

re-up 17:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe put a little more shading in the ear, just on the inner edge? And the pupil is looking a little pale, maybe darken that a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:33, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Pupils are fine to me, since it's the eye color on the other images, and if I put shading in the ear, I'll get told to define it /again/, plus I have no clue what you mean by the inner edge =P 20:35, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

I didn't mean the rest of the eye, I meant the black part of the eye, it's looking a bit more like pale gray. I think it's from the shading. Before, you had shading on the entirety of the ear. I just meant for you to shade the inner edge. If the ear looks like this (/\ then I meant shade along the edge here (/ <-- if that made any sense. That'll show the shadow of the inside of the ear without making the whole ear completely in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:42, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

The black parts of the eye are pure black, as I just checked, but I'll get to the ear thing in just a moment. 20:44, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 20:45, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Nice. :) I just zoomed in on the image and you're right, the pupils are pure black. It was just the light shiny things in her eyes that made it look gray. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 20:47, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

How about a CBA? 22:43, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the paw shading (on both paws) and chest shading could use a bit more blurring. Also, just out of curiosity, did you shade the ears? If you did, it appears flat. If you didn't, ignore that comment.

I only shaded on the edge of the ear, not on the actual ears, dear. I'll re-upload with the chest shading and feets shading blurred in a few minutes or so. 00:02, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

re-up  00:05, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) ~ For Approval
Here's the new version Whew, first charart in ages. It's probably for the best that I chose something simple since it's been awhile xD. Anyways, comments? 17:03, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading leaks away from the lineart on her belly 17:27, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

I cleared all of the outside shading twice to make sure it was gone, so there shouldn't be any. 17:35, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

No... I didn't mean outside of the lineart. Along her belly in just one little spot I can see white where there should be shading. Sorry to confuse you! 17:38, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's ok! I didn't notice that at first. Pixlr always makes the stomach shading leak away from the lineart sometimes 18:01, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Good work :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:39, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded and thank you C: 21:58, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

define the light on the tail. 22:22, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Floss (Q) - For Approval
New lineart, new charart. Colorpicked from her loner image. this was fun c: <span style="">22:04 Sat Jul 5

Define the shading and possibly add more white spots on her belly, tail, and legs. 22:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. I decided to use pure white because the shading was making it gray. hope this is better <span style="">22:11 Sat Jul 5

Re-up. Added highlights, since it might help lighten the belly. They're too bright, though, imo. <span style="">22:21 Sat Jul 5

Define the overall shading. Try tinting it, so it doesn't make the white look gray?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:40, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't think you have to tint shading, so I decided not to. <span style="">10:11 Sun Jul 6

the white is looking very gray, it almost blends in with the other gray as it is now. I'd suggest lessening the shading a bit,a nd I think a tint might help. 22:23, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. <span style="">23:24 Mon Jul 7

Cinderfur (Star) - For Approval
Colorpicked from apprentice image. 'Nuff said. <span style="">23:05 Sat Jul 5

Define the light on the tail and I'm having issues seeing the light source. The body says it's coming from the top left, while the forelegs says it's coming from the bottom left. <span style="">23:21 Sat Jul 5

Re-up. <span style="">00:11 Sun Jul 6

Make the nose color pink. His kit image has a pink nose, and i think his others do aswell.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:42, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i've got to blur that belly shading soon ._. <span style="">10:11 Sun Jul 6

Put some light on the front of those legs, they look a bit flat since they're totally in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten all the shading a tad, too? Except on the tail? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: black;">Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. i love dem eyes   Brick   15:24, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Add/define the tail light 22:40, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Sorry, I had day camp and I had to go home at 5:00, then I had other things. <span style="">23:24 Mon Jul 7

Palebird (Ki) - For Approval
shoves palekit at you <span style="">03:38, 07/7/2014

The earpink looks a little small, can you expand it a tad? *pushes Palekit back* Brick   15:00, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

the earpink looks fine, imho, but can you smudge or blur the shading a bit more 22:23, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Duck about the earpink. Define the eye depth a smidge -hugs Palekit- she's so freaking cute 22:39, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

'Reups she was also a pain in my rear to do lmao <span style="">23:13, 07/7/2014