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Sandgorse (T)~ For Approval
I dont know if I like the fluff tuffs or not. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 20:12, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Friendly reminder not to thumb your images! Reduce the pale parts on the tail, belly, chest and muzzle. For the first three, the paler parts are very thin and don't creep onto the main body very much. On the muzzle, reduce the pale parts so it doesn't reach the eyes or cheeks. 20:38, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink looks really light compared to his other images. Color pick from either of his previous images to get the correct color. Also, in addition to what Vec said, there needs to be some more stripes. 20:47, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

This needs to be renamed File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png. You are missing a letter in the file name. Also, put some bare skin on where the tufts are, being described with patchy fur means missing fur, which shows skin. If you need reference look at File:Sandgorse.star.png.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:58, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, the "T" in tunneler doesn't need to be uppercase.Potato Flakin (talk) 20:59, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re~Up Okay, and I want to know, should I edit the positioning and or the shape of the fluff tuffs? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:11, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

You probably should try to match the StarClan one. Did you dethumb this? Potato Flakin (talk) 21:17, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Also, this looks a little darker than his other images. Maybe ask Jayce for the base color if you get stuck.Potato Flakin (talk) 21:21, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Potato Flakin, I am trying to make it mach the warrior blank, because that is how it works, do the first one, not a later one, and it is dethumbed Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 21:42, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

In regards to the fur tufts, make them a little shorter and smaller, if that makes sense. More, you know, tufty ^^ Also, add a little pink (the ear pink color is fine) right underneath each tuft to mimic the exposed skin. 21:45, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re~Oops, fixed the fluff tuffs, I seem to like them now, and lowered the shading opacsity Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 22:00, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

I did both of Sandgorse's other images. The StarClan has more of the side you need to match than the warrior does. ​

In terms of placement, the pale parts on the belly and paws need to be receded 22:56, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

There's a little waste around the ear and fur patches on the hind legs, I believe some near tip of the tail. He generally seems much duller to me, the stripes seem to be much thicker here than his other images, there should be more stripes, The pale on the face extends too far across the cheek, The pale parts of the paws does not extend as far up here as on his other images, The pale on the chest and belly should be reduced a considerable amount. The pink to show the skin where the patchy fur is is also a fairly different color here, than on his other images, and this seems a little nitpicky, I thought I'd mention it. SquidwardPlays 23:04, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

Also, your image was aligned to the left. don't do that. SquidwardPlays 23:05, December 9, 2018 (UTC)

You've improved so much Owlbite! Can you add some depth to his skin patches? —

I can't see any shading through my screen. might be just me? -- Silverfur   skz  [ 09:31, 12/10/2018 ]

I dont get what you mean by, aligned to the left, and on the other 2, the patchy fur was a difrent color, I am not working on my computer,  so I cant work now, but I can fix the problems! (Please call me TrasH, I am more used to that and was questioning who you were talking about!) Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

You forgot to sign! Please thin out the stripes (this was said in a comment above, not sure if you saw it). The stripes are thinner on his Warrior and StarClan.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:27, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

I agree, the stripes should be thinner and there should be more stripes added to the body. Minkclaw You're my person 22:32, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

Oh, the hyphen in the file name needs to be a colon. Please lighten him up (I said this in a comment). The stripes need to be orange. Right now they're goldenrod (not sure how else to describe them). Don't forget adding depth to the skin, Echo mentioned that. Potato Flakin (talk) 22:40, December 10, 2018 (UTC)

I never said I wouldent do that, please stop repeting things that have already been said. I was typeing thet while walking to school, and didnt have time to sign it, I was at school and they emphisise no phones. and last time I did art, I used ~ and was fine, can I get a second opinion on if I should change it? Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 00:42, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

Potato, you need to stop. You've been told multiple times about your conduct. Please give Owl a chance to respond before you repeat comments. Anyways, back to the image. Owl, I renamed it for you, since it needs to be  File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png  in order for it to work on the article.

I..owe an apology to you Owlbite. I have been forcing you to rush, and I felt humiliated when I learned what I was doing- I am so so SO sorry for so many things. I often have problems controlling my emotions, so please take your time with Sandgorse. Feel free to ignore me being nitpicky..Potato Flakin (talk) 04:11, December 11, 2018 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the fur a little off from the rest of his images, and aren't the stripes sharper? Malina457 (talk) 17:05, December 12, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Alright, it's been a while since this has been uploaded. Owl, are you still working on this? You have one week from your upload date (which was the 9th) to reupload, which means you have until the 16th to do so. ​​

Im as good as crying, I miss doing art, and it has been... like forever from the last time, but I cant, I just... cant. If its not re-up in time, then Ill try at my next chance, but its just been hard to do any work, Ill try to have it up by the end of the day. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 23:46, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

There is no need to stress, Owlbite! If you need help, feel free to ask me questions on Discord! Also, you can try requesting an extension if you have been busy. 17:50, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

I know the discussion hasn’t been archived yet, but since everyone seems to be in mutual agreement, and I can’t see a reason why not, we’ll go ahead and give you an extra three days to upload. That should be the 19th if I’m not mistaken. Keep it up! 22:42, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

Thank you! I didnt have time yesterday, and I play sports and had a game today, I will have it up ''soon! ''Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:05, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Fluffs, re did it, the patches... but I like them better than before. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:44, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Hold up, Owl. You need to reupload under File:Sandgorse.tunneler.png. Are you unsure of how to do that? I can always help you if you need it! ​​​

Lighten the skin, he almost looks bruised (no offense). He is looking better. Thin out the stripes a lil more and make the tufts stand up a lil more as well. Potato Flakin (talk) 02:56, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Up, done for the night, I cant make the stripes much thinner, and I think they about mach. Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 03:23, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading. I can't see any compared to his | starclan version. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 03:28, 12/17/2018 ]

First of all, make sure that when you upload the file the portion between the brackets (the double [) does not contain '|left'. That aligns and screws up the page. Also, add more stripes, he's bare compared to his other images. There's too much pale on the paws too. SquidwardPlays 03:32, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Adding to Silver's comment, maybe defining your light source (the pattern between shaded and non-shaded areas based on the position of the "light") should also help. 04:13, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

The tufts and patches look too dark? They look like bruises. The earpink looks weirdly blurred too. -- Silverfur   skz  [ 10:19, 12/17/2018 ]

I think the colors might be slightly off; stripes look darker on the other images. Perhaps try and get a file from someone to match to? 22:40, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (T) ~ CBA
it's really bad ik I'll fix it later

Can you define the texture and smooth out the shading? It looks lovely! —

There's a out-of-place pixel on the tail tip that needs to be filled in. Also, did you fill in the nosepink? Right now it is looking like it's the pelt color. Good work Star!Potato Flakin (talk) 03:18, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

The shading is leaking along the belly. 03:54, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading darkness a bit? 14:26, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

I'll reupload later, and Vec, can you point out where the shading is leaking?

Snowed brought this up on other images, but could you fill in that missing black pixel on the tail tip? :) Sorry I didn’t see Potato's comment! 00:14, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Vec said shading was leaking along the belly, which it is. It's also leaking onto the tail. And what is that spot of shading near the shoulder? Is that part of the light source?Potato Flakin (talk) 00:55, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

it's very faint and that is where I believe the leaking is, though I did state my original statement when I was very sleep deprived whoops 02:04, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

re-up here's the thing with shading turned all the way up and no texture, and I don't see any leaking shading. sorry if I'm being blunt but I don't see any? also I'll fiddle with the shading some more because eww this is too dark

Nah you’re good it was probably just my tired eyes. My apologises. And I agree the shading is too dark. ^^ 03:04, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

In addition to lightening the shading, the shoulder shading looks like two dark dots on either side of the shoulder blade, and it doesn't quite go with your light source. 03:18, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Hawkey. Shoulder, haunch and belly all need defined shading and to be smoothed out a bit more. If your light source is from above, your haunch needs to have shading either on it or along the belly, rather than have it be in a flat line. —

re-up i'm a general, whee

Instead of me, he promotes Charles Lee / Makes him second in command CBA? 00:52, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (UN) ~ For Approval
hey guys, this was hard and my hands must rest but here is my art. all colors picked from the warrior, pattern done from the warrior side. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    08:36, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

This is gorgeous!! Can you lighten/define the face and neck shading and also smooth out the flecks a bit more on her chest? They seem to stop abruptly. —

Maybe add some white flecks on top of the brown ones. This was done with a specific brush originally, and the layers alternate between colored layers on overlay and multiply, and white. 14:01 Fri Dec 14

Alright, several things. One, there's tiny specks of waste floating around the character, two, lower the opacity of the shading on the paws, they are almost gray. Three, you didn't fill in the nose, and four, make the placement of the speckles on the chest more natural. They are a straight line right now. Otherwise than that lovely job!Potato Flakin (talk) 14:19, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, it looks completely black on her white fur. I absolutely love the speckles, and you did so well with such a challenging design!! 14:28, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading in the <-- ear and eye, along with by the tail tip.

16:22, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, Could you possibly redline what you mean, Sun? I'm not sure if the white i just added is good enough but yeah. As from what I was seeing the flecks/speckles match the warrior which I believe I'm suppose to be matching that one's pattern. Also the shading is black, Potato when you mention waste can you possibly say where it is instead of just telling me there's waste as it's sometime very hard to spot waste. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    22:06, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

The speckles on the foreleg closest to us also stop too abruptly as well. On the mentioned leg, it looks more like they got erased and left like that. Not to say that was what occurred, but it is how it appears. If that makes any sense. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:28, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shafing depth.

23:00, December 14, 2018 (UTC)

Yes the shading depth is a must, and the waste is outside the chest, back, tail and belly.Potato Flakin (talk) 00:57, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I know the shading depth is a must, Patch already pointes that out. Can you point out where because I don't see it. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    01:04, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I believe Potato is talking about this. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 01:09, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I think expanding the shading will also help on the main body and hind leg. 02:07, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Please crop the image to the lineart on all sides. ​​​​

I'm not exactly sure how to crop. Should I be croppinv the image if its fhe size from the wikis lineart? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    09:53, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not asking you to remove any of the lineart... it's just excess space that doesn't need to be there. I'm not asking you to distort your image or anything. =/ ​​​​

How would I crop it? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    17:08, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

There may be a arrow or something that allows you to shrink the border. Do you use GIMP? There is a cropping tool shaped like a square. There is some empty background that Jayce wants you to crop a little bit.Potato Flakin (talk) 17:16, December 15, 2018 (UTC)

Patch told me how, I'll upload soon. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    00:12, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, will fix the stomach and facial shading soon. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    20:55, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, fixed the rest of the shading had to remove some waste I forgot on the last upload. Oops. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    21:09, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Can you fix the arm speckles that I mentioned? It seems like you didn't change it at all or took into mind what I said. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 22:03, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

I must have read over the comment, my bad man. I'll fix it soon. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    22:05, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

There's waste outside the chest, back and tail. Bringing this up because I think you forgot about it.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:44, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

I removed it before as far as I could see, and pointing it out when a lot can't see it is a little nitpicky. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity    22:47, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

It can be hard to see, but it's there here, here, and here. May as well nab it when you're uploading next imo 22:52, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I got both this time. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   00:40, December 18, 2018 (UTC)        

Almost, there's still waste on the tail, my apologies for being so nitpicky! (The waste is near the base of the tail).Potato Flakin (talk) 01:25, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Err... I don't see anymore waste unless you consider this it? Potato, when telling people about waste, adding a picture and circling it out for people can help them a lot more than just pointing it out. If you take the image and change the background in an art program you're likely to see it. —

Could you smooth out the shading on -> front arm, and perhaps add a couple more speckles/flecks/brown spots so it doesn't look so straight down the arm? It basically goes on par with the shading down that arm and it's a bit disorienting. There's also a darker line of flecks on the tail that seem a tad out of place. Perhaps add some white flecks/spots there to break that up a bit?

That darker flecks is how it appeared on the warrior, I was doi g my best to match that since it showed quite a bit of this side of the body. Am I removing most of them or just a little bit of the flecks there? —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 17:18, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

I get what side you're matching, but I think the brown still needs to be broken up a bit. It's not quite that overrun by brown flecks on her other images. There's still a lot of white on that tail.

The shading feels a bit off. I redlined a basis that should be followed with your light source, and I recommend lowering the opacity or changing to a different colour because the black looks super stark on her white and brown pelt >: —

Re-Ups —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 06:07, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the flecks on her -> front leg? —

Mistystar (Alt Q) - CBA
gray-and-white alt. HOW do you mess that up.

Define the shading everywhere.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:32, December 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I consulted someone for another opinion, and I got suggested to only define the shading on the legs. ​​​​​​

can you define the shading a little on the belly? this is just art and I cant think of anything else wrong with this... masterpiece! <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:48, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

The shading on the belly is enough, but it could use a little more depth. :) 02:51, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 02:52, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Potato, that is repeating what you already commented, and I had said that I asked for opinions elsewhere and did what they suggested. I'm sorry, but I think the depth overall is fine. ​​​​

I agree, the shading depth is fine everywhere now. :D 02:55, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

oops, I meant depth, sorry! can you smooth out the ear pink? or is it good? I cant tell. <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 03:27, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean... all of my queen images are just like this. ​​​

I think the ear pink is fine, could you define the facial shading some? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   21:11, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Hmm can you define the shading slightly on the < front leg's upper arm/elbow? 22:55, December 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ​​​

okay, I couldnt tell if the earpink was a art style, but also, the earpink isnt cut off by the whiskers, or is that how it is ment to be? <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Im Am TrasH =^.,.^= 02:32, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

I can see what you're referring to, but this style of ear pink is very common on the queen blank, like Jayce said. :-) 02:38, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, it's a stylist choice. ^^ I think it looks fine, and to go along with Mink's comment, can you smooth out the shading on the forehead? —

Re-uploaded... that kinda contradicts Mink's comment, though? You guys keep sending me back and forth and I'm starting to get slightly confused.

CBA? 22:38, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Sandynose (W) - CBA
21:23, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. highlights and texture. 21:30, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   03:30, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Idk, I think the ones closest to us are fine? Maybe the legs furthest from us could use a little shading definition. 04:07, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:11, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Spiderleg (Star) - CBA
21:47, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the brown, it's a tad hard to see. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:12, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:51, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the tail shading just fine, I don't think it needs to be defined. ​

Reups 00:31, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Dapplepaw (AVoS) (K) - CBA
22:04, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit? —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   22:12, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:37, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink has been overshadowed on --> ear, I can't really see it. 02:44, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

The tail seems like there isn't any shading on it. Wouldn't there be some on the --> side? —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 03:29, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded there was, I darkened it 03:37, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Runningnose (MC Alt2) ~ For Approval
22:04, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Three berries aren't filled in.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:52, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded my bad, quick fix 22:54, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

This is so pretty, that shading is awesome. Can you define the light on the tail some? —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 03:28, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:41, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Pinenose (Star) - CBA
I tried. 22:24, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Mind defining the eye depth? I also think a few of your eye color pixels are covering the eye lineart on the edges 22:38, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:06, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

There's some waste outside the ear and <-- leg.Potato Flakin (talk) 23:10, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

For reference to Potato's comment. Also the lineart is blurred around the eyes. —

Reuploaded Thank you Echo 23:22, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the eye depth again? It seems very flat. 00:32, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I got it? 00:53, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Feathertail (Alt Star 2) - CBA
Unsure about the shading but i based this off my own gray tabby baby :3 —

It appears you missed a pixel on the back (I cannot redline sadly), and out of curiousity is your shading tinted yellow? Her tail looks yellow in some places.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:56, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Shading tint and highlight colors are artist's choice, it looks perfectly fine to me.

I don't see any uncoloured pixels on her back, and my shading tint is blue? Not sure how it looks yellow. —

This is gorgeous, Rin. Can you define the two foreleg shading and smoothen the --> head shading. —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 03:27, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this looks better? .o. —

CBA?

Shaded Moss (L) ~ For Approval
I love black and white kitties. —

Define the shading a bit on the body except for the chest.Potato Flakin (talk) 22:59, December 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded —

Can you define the texture? 00:33, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lets pretend I didn't forget the texture-- ^^; —

This is optional, but I think you should add more black on <-- side of the neck instead of white going all the way across. It appears on his other images the white chest is a little thinner. Totally up to you though! 02:46, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

I actually don't know - on his kit, his chest white extends far out but in his ancient and on his StarClan it's very defined. :0 Can I have a second opinion? I'm willing to change it 100% but unsure how or if I should. —

The order is rogue, StarClan, ancient, kit, then leader. Match the StarClan (since the rogue doesn't show the side in question), and we should tweak the kit as per the dates on each image. The placement in question wasn't changed when the StarClan was redone a few months ago, so it doesn't count here.

Reuploaded —

Sandynose (Ki) - CBA
i just shaded today yet now i forgot how i did it. 01:08, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. missed something. 04:12, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Thistleclaw (W Alt 3) ~ For Approval
Here we go, I absolutely love how I did the white on him. I'm very proud of this. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:09, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

This is very, very good! :D Define the ear pink? 01:22, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, oops I forgot it. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   01:27, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Oh my gosh this is a perfect depiction of Thistleclaw. Can you thicken the tail lineart? It appears to be thinner than the main body's. 02:47, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

The lineart in this area feels very ... stark I guess? Can you smooth out his tufts there a bit. Unsure how to describe it skjskdjs. —

I'm not quite sure what you mean by stark, I don't see an issue with the spikes there, unless your meaning they're too close to each other? —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 21:35, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

The lineart does seem a bit too crowded there, honestly.

Re-ups, maybe this better? —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 22:06, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Another re-ups, forgot to make texture seen. —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 22:11, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Tiny Branch (Kit Alt 2) - CBA
Poor baby boy 01:23, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

CBA?

Shivering Rose (MCA) - For Approval
I don't know completely how to feel about this one. I think I put too much shading onto the tail tip, but I'll fix that later. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:43, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Can you define the shading, I can't see it especially on the white parts, the tail white seems more pale gray than white as well. —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 03:54, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

The pale gray appearance is because of the shading slip up i mentioned; I put too much. I'll fix it while i define the shading. It is white though. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 03:58, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the herbs, and add some eye depth, because on the kit her eyes are amber.Potato Flakin (talk) 03:59, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reups <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 04:19, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

This is so cute ;; her white markings feel a bit dark, probably because of the shading - can you lighten the shading on those areas? —

Yew Tail (W) ~ For Approval
All colors from ES image. Comments? 05:24, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

The base colour seems to be leaking onto the tail a bit. —

It's supposed to be there. 05:26, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

I can see where you got it from since it's kinda on the ES, but considering this side matches the hunter's, I think it should be removed. It seems super off putting, especially with the warrior blank's lineart. —

Define the shading on the legs, can you also define the eye depth as well. —  Ellie  Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity   05:35, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Blue is the holder of the master pattern, though. I think she knows what's supposed to be there. If anything, we should be tweaking the hunter to also have that tiny spot. ​

Could you define the shading depth on the head, ears, and tail? 15:19, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:29, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

My apologies then ^^; Regardless, can you smooth out the shading on the neck and cheek a teensy bit? —

Spiderstar (W) ~ For Approval
Oh boy. I dont like the placement of those stripes. Silverfur  skz  [ 11:03, 12/19/2018 ]

The stripes definitely look thinner on the other images. 13:56, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thinned! i cant tabby -- Silverfur   skz  [ 14:24, 12/19/2018 ]

Could you add more texture and maybe not make the stripes so...rigid? There's more curves and waves in the other images. 20:55, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

To add onto Vec's stripes comment, the stripes don't seem to match that much? Use the leader's right side as a reference for matching. The stripes should be a bit more jagged and curvy, as well as thicker. His tail also has 5 stripe points (iirc it's been 2 seconds and I already forgot) —

I also think a couple more stripes could be added to his side from looking at the leader blank. —  Ellie Fear breeds a desire  for simplicity  ''' 21:46, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

Skywatcher (W) - For Approval
I freakin' LOVE Skywatcher and also his ragged pelt was super fun. 18:02, December 19, 2018 (UTC)

I really love your tufts here! Can you define his scars a bit more? —