Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 120

Echomist (Q) - Approved
05:01, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Can you upload the changes somewhere? I can't see them.

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba18240393863200.png 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

The pattern fades into the shading, and I think the smudged shading should be thinner? This appears really thick in certain places, like the tail, and it throws it off..

re-uploaded 02:07, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Gonna harass you to upload the changes to ezimba again, dear. Might as well do that by default for a bit, since image changes aren't showing again. =/

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140813C/ezimba18240326878900.png 21:45, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge/whatever and add depth to the shading quite a bit. 2:20 Wed Aug 13

reuploaded 22:40, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is leaking out of her left ear. Brick  05:40, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded arg waste is annoying 19:16, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading.

re-uploaded 23:38, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Give some depth to the shading, but moreso on the edges. Like maybe another, thinner layer of shading that isn't as thick?? idk if that's even the best way to explain it

re-uploaded i usually do that anyway but I was tryin to keep this shading simple lol 02:37, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Pikepaw (MO) (Star) ~ Approved
He needed a StarClan image. Colorpicked from both his Kit and Apprentice images. I know this probably doesnt match 100%, but this was kinda fun to do =).

I used a blue tint for the shading. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:14, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the markings a bit (not a whole lot, I'd say) using a smaller, harder-edged brush.

'''Re-uploaded. '''I used a 1x brush to smudge it, (It was smudged already, but i smudged it a bit more.) And i also added some highlights since i forgot to add that when i first uploaded.

If changes arent showing, go here: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=30j1cie&s=8#.U-qGq-NdVKY

Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:29, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Mmhmm. Now, could you darken those same spots a little bit and shade the ear pink? If you want to shade the ears, that is. It's not mandatory.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Darkened spots and smudged them a tad bit more. I didnt want to shade the earpink, since it was throwing off the color of the pink. I will add shading there if someone else points that out, though. Is that better?

If changes arent showing: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=20b1sw8&s=8#.U-qKneNdVKY~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:47, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

okay, on his other images he has a very light layer of lighter gray texture under his dapples and a very light layer of darker texture under his dapples, he also needs tiny specks hthroughout the image, I achieved it by using a bristle brush on size 10, but you can probably just use a size 1 or 2 and add them throughout. 22:38, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Added layers of lighter gray texture and darker gray texture, added specks, and also darkened spots a tiny bit since the textures made them look faint before. Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:06, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit more.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Defined light on the tail. is that better? =)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:10, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink. Brick 18:50, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I cant smudge it anymore, or it will fade to an almost invisible color. (I added no markings under his ears, so im guessing thats why the small patch of gray is right there).

I really hope i can get this approved before Bramblestar's Storm comes out.. .A. Is that better? ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  23:14, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Can you make the pupils larger? Other then that, it's really good. Tigerbird-The-Great 23:17, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Um.. I'd rather not. I've made them like that on all of my chararts, and its artist's choice on how big they are. =/. Thanks for the compliment, though. ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  23:19, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

can you define the tiny dapples? 02:38, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Made pupils more visible upon request from Snowwy, and defined the tiny dapples. is that better? ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  02:47, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Sandstorm (Alt Q) - Approved
Colorpicked from Paleggy's version. Changes here. 10:06 PM, Tue Aug 12, 2014

She needs a pale muzzle. She is shown with one.

reup  12:17 AM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

You linked the wrong image. That's a kit image. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:54, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reupped and fixed the link above ^^ 6:41 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

Darken the shoulder shading just a bit.

Define the light on the hindleg farthest from us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:54, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

re-up changes 10:34 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

Blur the shading a tiiiiny bit more? Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:39, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, I think it's good. If she blurs it anymore, I think she would end up getting told to define it again.

Define the shading on the face and give the shading on the belly some more depth 22:48, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

The hind leg that Breezeheart mentioned earlier in the comments still looks flat. Add a little highlight and it'll be good. c: 16:32, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Also, define the shading on the face. It looks quite flat right now; maybe give it some depth?-- ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  23:01, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Scarletwind already said that above. 10:59 PM, Sun Aug 17, 2014

Well, im sorry? And actually, she said give the belly more depth, I said to also give the face more depth, because both were actually looking really flat.-- ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  01:14, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define and give depth are pretty interchangeable imho. It all depends on the context. Which, I think the depth of the facial shading is fine, but where the shading ends could be defined a bit.

Re-up. You don't need to get so defensive, Breezeheart, I was just pointing out that Scarletwind already said to define the facial shading. As for that bit of it, I'm slighly confused about what you mean, Jayce, so I haven't really touched that. 6:58 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

Well, I'll be glad to at least try and explain what I meant. =P You know how the shading just tappers off after a while near the edges of it? Well, it appears to just vanish, and I'm basically saying the facial shading is a bit overblurred.

reup Thanks Jayce. 9:55 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

CBA?

Approved.

Deerleap (Star) ~ Approved
I love Deerleap :3 21:30, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Expand/define the earpink. And remember to sign your posts with ~ ~ ~ ~, mystery member! :3 Brick  21:47, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge where the white meets the gray a bit more, also, smudge the tail tip also. and define the overall shading.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:50, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Better? SziriXxX (talk) 22:21, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps add some depth to her eyes? also, is her muzzle and chest supposed to be white, or a pale gray?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:26, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

It shouldn't be either. Also, lighten up her legs- they should be white.

Re-ups Darkened chest and muzzle,lightened legs and added eye depth. SziriXxX (talk) 22:48, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Mind defining; NOT darken, the shading on the legs? also, i can barely see the earpink in the ---> ear. ~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:54, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Defined leg shading and lightened earpink SziriXxX (talk) 23:25, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

I see a white pixel on her tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:27, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Got rid of the white pixel SziriXxX (talk) 23:41, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the front paw shading. 13:31, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 18:16, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes kind of merge into the shading, so if you could lighten it up a bit that'd be nice. Also, smudge the white into the gray fur a bit more...It currently looks a bit abrupt. Looks pretty :) Keep up the good work! 16:18, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes and shading appear good to me, honestly. I can distinguish them from the shading just fine.

I can't see the stripes through the shading on the top of the back. It looks like a solid stripe of shading. I don't know it might look different to others. 16:55, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

On the upper back? That dark stripe is a dorsal stripe, and there aren't any other stripes up there but that one giant one, which is supposed to be there... unless we're not looking at the same area, which is possible.

It might actually be the dorsal stripe. I ddin't think about that. But even if it is, I don't see any stripe in this pale gray part after it...[don't know] you see it for yourself. But I don't wanna fight again lol I respect you too much to do that. 22:18, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

It's a pretty thick dorsal stripe, and it would be hard to fit in smaller stripes, since there's only a couple pixels of space.

Re-ups Smudged white parts SziriXxX (talk) 20:33, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

I love it! Tigerbird-The-Great 21:20, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Tiger, if you don't have any critique to give, please don't comment on a charart. It counts as spam. ^^' Perhaps define the light/ and shading on the tail? ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  21:34, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Tigerbird :3 SziriXxX (talk) 09:51, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

The chest area seems a bit flat. If you use highlights, maybe add one there? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:40, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Added highlight SziriXxX (talk) 15:59, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Brick (Ro) - Approved
Now that we have an actual confirmed description instead of an assumption...

Wow, this is really good. =) Perhaps define the spot where the fur is missing a bit more?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  22:36, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Darnit, I wanted this.... Define the shading on the tail a tiiiiny bit? This is gorgeous. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  23:27, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. <3

Define the farthest hind leg's shading slightly. gah i was gonna nab this once I was done with Lilystem    Brick  10:16, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

maybe blur the body shading a bit 10:45, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tweaked other things.

I'm sorry if this is a dumb question feel free to shoot me if it is but isn't s he supposed to have a collar? Brick 17:35, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

That's actually a very good question, Brick. Are we still doing the collar thing for all BloodClan cats, guys? I honestly can't remember, and it's been ages since I've made an image for BloodClan.

Re-uploaded. Gave him a collar anyways. Not making it anything other than purple.

Blur the tail shading a bit. He looks really good ^.^ 22:31, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur the edges of the head shading just a tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiny bit? like so tiny you just pass over it with the blur tool twice or something <span style="">11:38 PM, Wed Aug 20, 2014

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 23:59, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt.. (small) I'm such a killjoy x.x (/small) But investigating the image closely I saw a few flecks of faded lineart near the collar. Hope that gives you a good idea about where it's at. So sorry again! 13:03, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

i dont think a tiny bit of lineart is enought to break the cba so w/e continuing it 14:11, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Continuing from original CBA; approved. It was waste, not faded lineart, btw, which I fixed before but it didn't want to show on the changes.