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Harepounce (star) ~ For Approval
Harepounce for President  04:54, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Remove or thin out the facial shading <== there 11:15, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 15:07, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Smoothen out the tail shading just a bit. 20:31 Mon Nov 9

Shading is leaking on the ear. 15:01, November 10, 2015 (UTC)

I think you forget to fill in the nose. If you did fill it in just disregard this comment. 18:04 Tue Nov 10

It is filled. Anyway, she looks slightly cross-eyed.

I dont see how she does... She is supposed to look bottom right. 00:11, November 11, 2015 (UTC) re-up 15:47, November 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Also, maybe fix the light source and shading on the tail too, it doesn't look like it matches with the rest of the image. 15:37, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

This is the same exact light source as Houndstar's starclan image, so the shading is fine. It does match with the rest of the image. 19:31, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

at least thin out the bottom side of the tail shading because i covers up the whole tail and confuses others

Cow(R) - For Approval
Alright, so unless it says in the books she was named after the apperance of a cow, I'm giving her the apperance of my cat since the last time I did that, the cat's description was magically changed by an author later on, so let's try this pattern again. The eyes are also a warmer green color but if they look too yellow I can tweak them a bit. But yeah, as always, if something's outta place then just tell me! I had fun with this  01:33, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her side just a tad? --Dewsplash (talk) 04:42, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge (i assume thats what you did, judging by how it looks) the shading a lot more. I can /see/ the smudge marks... 10:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I can't smudge on Sai. She has fur texture  04:53, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Either way, I can see strange markings on the main body where I think the shading is meant to be. 13:42, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Leaf (DTC) (es) ~ CBA


Smooth out the shading on the body and tail, but leave the white spots alone. 02:40, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Christ black cats are hard

there shouldnt be any bright spot on the underbelly where the bright white is, cus its behind the leg 13:25, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Is this what you meant?

Can you give a bit of depth to the eyes? They look kinda flat.

Re-uploaded

Comments before approval? Nice. :) 16:03, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (ES) - For Approval
Jackdaw's Cry my bab

First ever textured cat yo 04:10, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him more. --Dewsplash (talk) 04:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

there's a strange dorsal-stripe like stripe

Re-ups I accidentally forgot his nicked ear so i added that. Yes i see the weird pixel on it i'll fix that. Also, i didn't add stripes on him...? 05:14, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Again, i cleaned everything up so it should look better now 05:14, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Crop the image

Reups 05:35, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Make the texture flow more with the fur. 12:32, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

the light on -> that leg shouldnt be as it is, it contradicts the light source. and the shading needs to be blurred or something, 17:49, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

I don't have light on the > leg.... 22:36, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and smooth out the texture, and I'm not sure if you got what Bramble shade, but the texture does need to flow more. I'm not repeating comments, I just didn't know if you got what she said. 03:06, November 14, 2015 (UTC)\

Reups  i just redid the texture completely, i wasn't very happy with it either. 03:57, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

It still needs to flow with the fur more. And please upload your images under Jackdaw's Cry.es.png. I renamed this for you, but in the future please remember to upload it under the same file name you originally uploaded it as. I believe you got this warning with Daisytoe as well. 09:35, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't really know WHAT to name it because of the apostrophe, so I just went for what I assumed it to be. Also, I believe I am consistently naming them now... 19:01, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

it kinda looks like he's got a lazy eye 19:42, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

What are those whitish streaks? O.o If they're highlights, maybe try lowering opacity 20:06, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Dew Petal (Ki) ~ CBA
Why was this weird just now

if its texture on the silver part of the head, it needs to be smudged more because they look like stripes. ` 17:41, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading on the face could be defined a tad. Beautiful image! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:22, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?

Mhm

CBA?

Mistpelt (Star) - For Approval
tired lil elder cat 03:50 Fri Nov 13

sharpen and expand the shading

I don't think she should sharpen it but she could definitely blur it and expand it a lot. 07:32, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

there's like a dot in the far lower left corner? 13:26, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 02:35 Sat Nov 14

expand the shading everywhere, especially on the tail. Define the light on the legs.

Blue Whisker (Alt. Q) ~ Withdrawn
I'll define the shading on the next upload. 19:55, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the pale part of the belly, and did you forget the earpink? 20:04, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out and expand the shading more, and smudge all the markings 20:05, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. No, I didn't forget the earpink, but I went ahead and defined it. Also redid the shading. 20:18, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading more, and define the shading on her front half. What program are you using? 23:33, November 13, 2015 (UTC)

Is the earpink gray? The ears just look like they're part of the pale parts. Also define the shading depth a little. 00:58, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Icebreeze, yes, the earpink is gray; in the manga, they seem to be the same/similar color as he marking, though I'll make it more pink if anyone says to. @Snowdapple, I use Gimp. 01:45, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Try and make it more pink, gray cats usually don't have earpink that gray. 03:05, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:20, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

What setting do you have the blur tool on? I'd suggest using the full on blur tool and not one of the lowered opacity ones. 15:57, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:32, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks over blurred

Define shading everywhere

Withdrawing. I can't get this to look right, and my stupid computer is making it just about impossible to do chararts. 01:24, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Riverstar (ES) - For Approval
I...I hate this. I think I'm just gonna redo the shading 800 times. 02:38, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

There's a white pixel near the tip of his tail. Lovely work! 03:09, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, this is good! The shading's leaking on the back leg furthest away from us. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:31, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little at the top of foreleg farthest from us, near the chest. 13:01, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: What even is this. And thank you guys for the lovely comments. Should I blur the haunch shading more and lighten the chest?

I can still see a white pixel at the top of the tail, and I think the shading is leaking by the chest in between the two front legs, and on the back leg farthest from us, possibly switch the shading so its on ==> that side of the leg, while the light is on <== that side? I can also see you missed a tiny bit of waste in between the two front legs 15:59, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

could you smudge the earpink a little more? boo-e-ti-ful 20:07 Sat Nov 14

Re-uploaded: Changed the shading to look more like Gray Wing's. 22:56, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Heronwing (Star) - Declined
Guess who finally became friends with GIMP. 02:42, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! Define the earpink a little. Also, smooth out the chest shading. 13:06, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:28, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur/smudge the shading overall some more? Amazing job ^^ 16:00, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you! Hopefully the changes are visible enough, I can blur it some more if I need to. 16:43, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little more on the main body and chest. Looks great :) 20:06 Sat Nov 14

Re-uploaded 19:33, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

This was reserved 8 hours after posting. Declined. 19:49, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

But unless the image was already reserved by someone else when Raven reserved it, couldn't they repost it immediately after it's been archived, and it would be perfectly within guidelines since nobody else had it reserved at the time of their reservation, and it was, at that point, reserved before posting it? What's the point of declining it if it's now reserved, without conflict? I could understand if there was a reservation conflict, but as far as I can tell there wasn't.

Rockfall (Star)- For Approval
;-; Ermegesh I FINALLY finished, the eyes were a big pain in the butt. Well, anyways here he is!

The earpink is overlapping the lines, and there's a couple of white spots still there (along the back and near the chest). Also, define the shading on the right leg/paw a little more. Looks pretty good! 00:40, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded.

Blur the shading a lot more on the main body. The shading also appears to be leaking there. Also, give the ear pink a smudge and make sure its not on the same layer as the linear art.

Reups.

Reuploaded again.

Alder (ES) ~ For Approval
01:14, 15, 11, 2015

Define the shape and flow of the shading. 07:10, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

the shading appears to be leaking, at least apparently. It could be the white thou

The markings on the kit aren't smudged or blurred or stylized or anything... It's just a smaller flecked brush.

Re-uploaded 00:58, 17, 11, 2015

Dust Muzzle (ES) - For Approval
I totally forgot I had this file saved under the wrong name and just uploaded it as was without changing the name. :P Sorry to ask, but could someone fix that for me? Anyway, I'm really happy with this, trying to match the kit was definitely interesting. ^^ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 04:24, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

define the chest shading

Eagle Feather (ES) ~ For Approval
Not a fan of that shading - I'll definitely smooth it on out on the next upload 13:58, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the hind legs a little? Lovely! 23:02 Sun Nov 15

Robinwing (TC) (Star) - For Approval
01:55, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the main body. Looking nice. I'll promote you into an apprentice

Smoothen shading everywhere :)

Re-uploaded Much better. 01:55, Nov. 17, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Song (Q)- For Evaluation


My first character art. Give as much critique as possible. Jaysnow (talk) 02:16, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

smudge or blur the patches more, expand and blur the shading quite a bit.

Will do. Thanks. Jaysnow (talk) 02:25, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and blur the earpink, as well as add some shading to them 02:30, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

I'm going to change her to short haired, because that's how Kate imagines her... Jaysnow (talk) 08:07, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Add more shading to her face, it looks slightly flat. Also, define shading on her legs

Lighten the shading a bit, too. 22:26, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Mud Paws (ES) ~ For Approval
I spent way too much time on this and I still hate it.

Re-upload: Somehow forgot to add earpink, haha

How did you even do this... *.* define the facial shading a bit, please

Re-upload: Did that do it? aLSO THANK YOUU :3 12:19, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the shoulder a little more. Looks really nice! 22:06, Nov. 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upload: I messed around a little with the lil guy. I know the shoulder still looks wonky, I'll get to that in a bit. :3 05:37, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading some more on the body, hind leg, and tail? Awesome job! 12:42, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Thorn (ES) ~ For Approval
Kinda happy with this 20:14, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

You should be, this is amazing :D Smoothen shading on her tail and the two legs farthest from us and define it on her face. 20:22, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks c: 20:44, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

There seems to be a round spot of waste above the tail. (had to scroll around to make sure it wasn't my computer screen lol)

Re-ups 15:50, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Gorsefoot (Star) - For Approval
21:52, November 16, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the head shading a tad. 00:13 Tue Nov 17

Re-uploaded The shading there doesn't want to cooperate. 02:42, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Gooseberry (Q) - For Approval
the base itself is actually really pale... if I lighten the image too much more, I don't think I'm going to be able to see it, so please keep that in mind. Base =/= stripes, and I think you can have darker stripes on a paler base.

Define the head shading a tad? Lovely. ~Russettail13

Re-uploaded.

define the shading on the legs 02:43, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading everywhere. My macbook shows everything darker and I still can't see it on the screen. 11:16, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I am not used to this color in the least.

Cloudberry (TC) (Star)~For Approval
00:52, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the left paw a little more. Lovely work. c: 00:57, Nov. 17, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded Thank you ^^ 01:04, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe consider using Yellowfang's star nose lineart? This one looks a bit odd, and as far as I can tell, all Cloudberry's other linearts are the same as Yellowfang.

its fine....if anything yellowfangs looks odd. 09:53, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Tis amazing. c: I feel as if the main body shading could use some smoothening out, or is that just the shading style? 11:01, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Morning Fire (Ki) ~ For Approval
05:21, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading/base color? At first I thought this was black, and then after looking closer, I thought it was black and brown. I couldn't tell it was meant to be solid brown until I actually checked the description on the page.