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Cinderheart (Alt. KI) - Approvedd


My first charart! I spent a ton of time on it ^^". Cinderheart's alternate kit form -- she was described in Sunset as 'looking exactly like Cinderpelt (dark fluffy gray)' instead of gray tabby. Comments?  Maple   frost!   19:40, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 20:57, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose; gray cats usually don't have pink noses, and rename it Cinderheart.kit.alt 21:03, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights to the tail. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  21:11, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Move the highlight to the chest and add highlights to the fronts of the legs. Mistfire Owl City! 21:39, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. What now? :)  Maple   frost!   00:05, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a little more. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  00:06, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

* coughs* Rename it Cinderheart.kit.alt, please. 01:23, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

* Facepaw* Sorry... I was being an idiot xD. I named it Cinderheart.alt.kit... ugh... Sorry, I'll rename it when I re-upload it (in a few minutes when I finish editing)  Maple   frost!   01:53, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! (/Is very glad she re-read her post before clicking save page. That would've been an embarrassing typo.)  Maple   frost!   02:00, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is an extra period after alt. You just need to name it Cinderheart.kit.alt, it will add the .png to the end on its own. Sorry for the lack of image-related comments, I will once you name it correctly ^_^ 03:33, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Uggghhh xD sorry... you have permission to cyber-punch me. I know, I'm exasperating. It's part of my internet charm ^_^ (NOT). Okay... it's named right, now. I think... xD. Maple  frost!   05:20, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Change the nose color to a darker gray. 17:15, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading thoroughly. B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  17:39, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Maple  frost!   19:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look... mismatched and blotchy. Can you try and fix that? ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  20:43, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks crooked. -- 20:44, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple  frost!   23:23, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading thoroughly. 23:26, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are they too strong or something? I keep getting told to do that... they're as blurred as they possibly can be, so are they just too strong? Maple  frost!   23:34, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

The nose is still a bit pink. And no, they're not too strong. You need to blur them, they're too blotchy. 04:01, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the nose completely black/very very dark gray? Or just darken the current pinkish-gray nose? Maple  frost!   05:05, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose colour a dark gray -- 00:12, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I fixed the nose and splotchiness. It doesn't look splotchy anymore ^^", thank goodness. I'm sick of the Blur tool. xD  Maple   frost!   17:53, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks really blotchy to me. 21:24, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Me, too. There are scraps of shading and highlights everywhere, and looks a bit disorganized. Also, blur the tail shading a tad. -- 21:26, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? Maple  frost!   21:57, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Now it looks how it did before XD Blur it mostly on the chest area, but on the legs and the tail too. ❋  Rainwhisper   ❋  22:07, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Would you want some help with the blotchiness? 04:41, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

-Sigh-... Whenever there's blotchiness, there's something I like to do called... REDOING THE SHADING AND HIGHLIGHTS. I just fill 'em in again and redo the shading and highlights and hope it works. B l  i  zz  a  r  d  f  u  r  White Cats  Rule Leaf-bare!  04:03, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

If they redo the shading and highlights, it may make it more blotchy, with the Pixlr blurring. 05:05, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

The earpinks should be a bit more consistent. 08:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I completely restarted--been working on this nonstop. :D I think I got it fixed. Comments? *Crosses fingers* Oh, and please give me little details, too--like, say, the eyes are a bit to greeny-blue, etc. Don't be afraid to point something like that out--I want you to. I'm trying to become a great Charart member :).  Maple   frost!   06:28, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Much better, Maplefrost. :] Make the nose lighter and blur the ear-pink more. 01:53, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll go work on it now :). P.S.--Has nothing to do with this, but... can ANYONE tell me what happened to Bramble and why Oblivion's now leader? It's like one day I logged on and Bramble was listed as leader, then suddenly Oblivion... and I can't find anything about it. I checked PCA news, tried the (confusing) forums, and even poked around on Bramble's profile... nothing. On his/her (I think last I read Bramble's a her xD) profile it still says 'I'm the leader of Project Charart, yada yada yada".  Maple   frost!   03:45, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Read the discussion on "New Leadership" in the discussion area. :3 03:50, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, I read it :) congratz on being new Dep. Humm... does that look any better? Note: For some odd reason every time I clicked 'overwrite existing photo with yours' ('cause I have to name it Cinderheart.kit.alt), it would say 'success!' and I'd click 'return to editing', yet it would look exactly the same... I tried to get it to work about ten times, to no avail. So now I'm just crossing my fingers that it'll show the 'right' new one.  Maple   frost!   04:25, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the shading-- 22:58, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten highlights. This is quite good =3 ޓ  S u n  s p ir it  ޓ  Santa Paws is coming to town! |undefined 09:30, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Great job, Maplefrost. 8) The ear pink should be even on both ears. :) -- 21:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Is that better? I think the ear pink's a bit too faint now... am I right? Comments? ℳąφℓ₠ ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  22:00, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, you're right XD so brighten it up a little. 03:30, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

xD Is that better? (Reuploaded) ℳąφℓ₠  ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  17:06, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Whoa! Nice sig, Maplefrost. This is really good, just make the nose a lighter gray. Mistfire Owl City! 17:13, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks and thanks! :) Thanks also for giving me the link to Oblivion's Sig tutorial, back when I was a WWiki noooob... Heh, I'll go change the nose color now. :) ℳąφℓ₠  ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  17:44, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

How's that? (Reuploaded) ℳąφℓ₠  ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  04:03, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

There's a single circle of highlights on her chest. Blur and smooth it out. Scarlet wind Medicine Cat of SolarClan 15:27, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the highlights, and I can hardly see the ear pink. 19:07, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Dodge the face a tad more. 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Working on it! Just making sure you don't think I've abandoned it ;) ℳąφℓ₠  ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  19:32, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Just darken the shading a little on the paws, unless the light is coming from the front. It seems to be coming from the top. Otherwise, it's FANTABULOUS! Butterfly } { Song!  00:25, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and brighten the highlight there. Try making the transition smoother. =) -- 14:29, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 19:48, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

If it is declined, might I work on it? I'm horrbily bored now that I have no charart to do Maplepool 04:08, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you can work on this now-- 04:17, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

What? No! I'm right here! I'm reuploading now! One sec. It's still mine. I never resigned... ℳąφℓ₠ ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  21:33, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... how's this? I think I fixed the ears. I still need to work on the paws, which I'll do on my next upload, but I kind of rushed this one... I don't want this to be taken away from me :/ I never withdrew it. It's just... been the holidays. I couldn't be on 24/7. I'm back, though. This is my first charart; please don't take it away from me. Anyway... reuploaded, comments please. ℳąφℓ₠ ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  21:57, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Maplefrost, this is wonderful! Just blur the shading at the base of the tail a little. Mist fire I'd like fries with that 18:33, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more consistent. 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thank ye ^^. Okay, I fixed the tail and paws, but I haven't reuploaded it because... well, what exactly do you mean by consistent? Heh, please don't laugh... just need to make sure before I mess it up more. ℳąφℓ₠ ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  20:41, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Consistent means to make them the same. The right (our right) earpink seems a little brighter than the left and they are not in the same shape. 21:33, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

And while you're at it, brighten it a bit more =) --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:46, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is great Maplefrost! Just brighten the face a little.  Mistfire Epic Fail  05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:35, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yup! :) ℳąφℓ₠  ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  04:33, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded! ℳąφℓ₠ ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  04:39, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Juuust making sure XD Blur the chest highlight/shading --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:23, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rename the image 'Cinderheart.kit.alt' 15:53, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe a little less shading, or maybe some more highlights? Either will work. -

 UNI  01:04, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  16:51, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not entirely sure on this so bear with me. The shading could be blurred and are there hightlights? I don't seem to see any:PMINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  01:14, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

If this is declined, may I take over? :3 22:44, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm workin' on it, sorry. It's not an excuse, but my dog passed away recently. I haven't been on much. ℳąφℓ₠ ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  01:02, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Poor you and doggie D: Make the earpink brighter and redder.  Mistfire Epic Fail  03:48, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks fine to me, just darken the nose colour/make it dark gray-- Night  shine  05:41, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Why is the charart called KitLongFehmm222 O_o? Rename it Cinderheart.kit.alt please 15:32, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know O_o Why the heck did it name it that? It's saved in my comp as 'Cinderkit charart'. Anyway, I reuploaded. ℳąφℓ₠ ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  22:17, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Looking good. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:22, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading.  Mistfire 1000 Edits!  01:58, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. Are you still working on this? --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:49, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  02:59, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

If Maplefrost can't/doesn't want to finish, I can take over. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 14:03, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'm done. I don't deserve to continue this; I'm not on enough. So... I'm withdrawing it... sorry... this doesn't mean I can't do other chararts in the future, does it? ℳąφℓ₠ ƒя☼ş₮ ❣ ツ  04:28, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

I doesn't, don't worry. I'm assuming Cloudskye will take over this image now, so it won't go to waste. :) 04:34, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm working on it. No image should go to waste. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 13:25, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed the color of the eyes, blurred the chest and re-did the ear pink. So, does it look better? Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 13:37, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can the highlights/shading be blurred anymore? 22:10, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. River, I did what I could without killing the lineart. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 13:32, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the body, darken the nose colour-- Night  shine  23:11, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near the tips of her fur and create a bit more of a contrast between the shading and the highlight. Scarlet wind Medicine Cat of SolarClan 15:55, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. The kit image is getting hard to work with. Give me a bit to get it done. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 12:50, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does she look any better? I am not good with the shading. The more I try and fix it...the blacker it looks. Even when I try and repair it with highlights. I don't think it looks that bad, though. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 18:12, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

The ear-pinks look like they're different sizes, or maybe that's just me. And also maybe brighten the eye color to it matches Cinderpelt's eye color, since she was described as looking like Cinderpelt's spitting image. Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 23:32, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the eye color to match Cinderpelt's, and I also re-did the ear pink. Comments? Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 13:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks like there is a black spot above her eye. Darkhallows... Mew? 20:05, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 22:46, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a black dot over her eye. Echostar229 01:37, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better now? Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 12:23, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight a bit more. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 14:59, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred like I was told. I'm not sure if I can blur anymore. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 17:11, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail, thicken the shading on the right Night  shine  00:50, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added a highlight and thickned the shading. Cloud skye  The  Dark   Forest   Is   Rising 12:41, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Darkhallows... Mew? 21:15, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the right. 01:12, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Frostheart, I think the lightsource is the top left corner, in which case it shouldn't be changed. Darkhallows... Mew? 07:50, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. Darkhallows is right. Repeating 24 hours Night  shine  19:10, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (Ki) - Approved
Creekfeather as a kit 21:55, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing, lighten the ear pink, darken the stripes-- 22:02, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and smudge them. 22:27, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened whole image, lightened earpink, darkened stripes, and smudged them more. 23:00, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes more; make them look feathery. It kind of looks like he is flecked. 23:33, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged them even more...... I think I need to smudge them all around, not just going with the fur, to make them look more feathery..... 02:05, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and darken it a tad. Also, maybe try smudging the stripes with the size 1 brush and just run it back and forth through the tabby mark. If my charart was approved I was going to do Creekkit and that's what I did. (I made his image because I was bored XD) If that doesn't make sense then just leave it be :) 02:22, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm trying my best..... I'm also starting to despise the smudge tool..... ;) 03:53, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the spots more stripe-ish. :) 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried to make them more stripe-like :S 14:27, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little bigger. 14:41, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Enlarged earpink. 01:48, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too fuschia, and the stripes don`t look like stripes. Make them a lot thinner. 22:46, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I Fixed the earpink, although I'm not too sure about the stripes. They aren't very stripe-like on his warrior image, and I want a few more user's opinion on that. No offense. 00:47, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think they should look a little sharper and a little less thick. Maybe even get rid of a few of the stripes. 01:22, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes should be in a triangle shape and then smudged heavily. 01:09, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It looked so good and strip-y, until I smudged it.... :( 16:24, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

It looks really nice! Just make the earpink a little pinker, like on the warrior image. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  02:06, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Use the smallest possible brush for smudging. It will help your outcomes. =) - -   Wildheart  W h a t i s r i g h t n o w ? 03:31, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a tad skinnier. 05:48, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 04:51, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Good. You got the idea when you smudged it. Looks good, but make the stripes smaller so that it's like little patches. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:56, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Great job, Rainlegs! =) Can you add some highlights to the tail? -- 14:06, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 03:33, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to make the stripes into something more resembling the patches on his other chararts. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:37, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Okay..... Stripes or Patches? I'm switching back and forth here. 02:42, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

They are stripes, but they are smudged to look like patches. 15:38, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay. That clarifies things..... 14:51, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Just make stripes and smudge them a lot with the small circle tool to make it look somewhat like a patch-- 23:06, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the image. 02:55, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, add shading under the chin, lighten the ear pink, smudge the patches. -- 04:14, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lemme guess...... Thin out chin shading? 01:35, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Haha chin shading looks fine. I know this is kind of contradicting what nightshine JUST said, but darken the earpink. Not a LOT, so that it's like it was before, but just so it doesn't look so bubble-gum pink, y'know? =P Make the patches a leetle bit smaller and smudge them a leetle bit more XD --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:09, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit. 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:28, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour, lighten the ear pink, define the patches-- night  shine  ❄ 02:08, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good! Move the chest highlight up a bit. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:01, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Nerp. Was grounded from the computer. I'm back, though! 00:52, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but in the way of consistency, could be a bit better. Perhaps make the patches a bit smaller. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:29, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  01:02, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry! I was re-doing the image, then I had some other life-issues, and didn't get around to this. Will re-upload in a minute. 01:16, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-did image. I stole all the colore from Creekfeather's warrior image. 01:34, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes some more. This looks great! Ravensoul101 03:02, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:31, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and the nose colour-- Night  shine  23:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is it normal to want to shred a fictional character into teeny-tiny peices? 01:33, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink just a tad. 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:39, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches some more and darken the shading a tad --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:34, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:32, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Three days, and no comments....... Anyone? 01:26, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs, be patient. Blur the darker stripes.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  05:02, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.... I might need a little help with blurring the shading... 00:29, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

I can, if you want... <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  02:17, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you? That would be great! 03:17, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patches some more. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 21:12, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. Mistfire? 02:54, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it even more. Perhaps with a larger brush. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:26, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I smudged it even more, using a variety of brush sizes. Mistfire? 23:37, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and add shading under the chin. Darken the shading as well-- Night  shine  02:59, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Chinshading= UBER failure....... Mistfire? 01:38, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really see any stripes on this, make them darker. Blur the shading -- Night  shine  05:42, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Guys, I'm just having issues with this cat..... I'm gonna withdraw him. If anyone wants him, go ahead. 21:17, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

May I take over this one? ✳  YatzSliversword   Let it snow...  ✳ 22:26, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Knock yourself out. :) 22:29, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading under the chin, brighten the ear pink, and brighten the highlight on the chest. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 15:52, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good, but blur the chest and shading. 01:50, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I blurred everything and made the ear pink lighter. ✳  YatzSliversword   Let it snow...  ✳ 15:37, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Needs to be blurred a lot more, and the ear pink should be made even. Also, change the nose to pink, or at least a lighter gray. Darkhallows... Mew? 20:11, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes more noticeable. Just make the nose colour lighter, don't make it pink though. 22:48, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red and blur it. 01:10, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

You need to rename it 'Creekfeather.kit'. Not 'Creekfeather.kit2'. Echostar229 03:07, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Uh... I don't know how to overwrite the existing photo, so does the name matter? ✳  YatzSliversword   Let it snow...  ✳  11:08, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Just name it 'Creekfeather.kit' and upload it. It'll take you to a page with both versions of the image and click on 'overwrite current image with new image' or something. And that's how to re-upload images over previous ones rather than creating a new one each time. I hope that wasn't too vague... <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 21:53, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Righty ho. I did it. ✳  YatzSliversword   Ah, spring...  ✳  16:02, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the top of the chin shading. Darken the stripes, make the ear-pink more reddish, and blur it, too. 00:26, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. L) - Approved
This is my first leader as well as the first PCA charart I made with GIMP. I'm not sure about the highlights. What do you guys think? 00:07, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur/smugg the ear pink, and lighten the whole image. 00:19, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights a little and blur them. 00:38, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflight, when you use the blur tool, turn the rate up to 100. Not sure if you knew that. But anyways, lighten the entire image and make the nose colour darker. 01:06, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image, and brighten the highlights. Also, when you make a black cat, make sure you fill it in with a very dark grey, instead of solid black. Also, darken the shading. I love the way you did the ear pink, by the way! 01:22, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as if you've colored his pelt with solid black, because I can't see the lineart. My suggestion is to redo the image, using a dark gray for the pelt like Nightflower said. You can try lightening it, though. 03:09, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I didn't use black, but it was close. I redid it and completely did away with the highlights. 03:17, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! Blur and thicken the shading. 04:13, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur highlights and shading. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:35, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

lighten him just a little bit, and smug the ear pink with the black. 06:17, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I redid him. Comments? 18:25, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and darken the whole image; right now it looks dark gray. Add shading under the chin and lighten the ear pink-- 00:17, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Bleck...comments? 18:54, January 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Good job. Darken the shading on the tail. 17:43, January 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * lighten the front legs more*Wildfire* 15:01, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading under the chin on the right side, blur the shading thoroughly, darken the nose colour, smudge the black into the ear pink-- night  shine  ❄ 02:08, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add/brighten the highlights. 21:26, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Ah. Much better. 22:17, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight a bit and make it a bit bigger as well. Looks great. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:00, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't add highlights. 00:20, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay then just thin out the shading a bit on the haunch. =) --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:10, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think I can without it looking messed up. Sorry. 19:34, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image. Just dodge it on like .5% and then maybe we'll be able to see the lineart better. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:20, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 10:27, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and blur it-- Night  shine  01:01, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh Blackstar is white with black ears and paws KAT 03:20, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is an alternate picture. Hence the "Alt. L" on the heading. Please sign with four tildes (~) on talk pages like this. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:15, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur highlights and shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  05:01, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay everyone. I am working on this, so please leave this as it is. 19:55, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights around the neck 17:29, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reploaded17:23, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the front leg highlights go up and down the legs.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  02:19, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Um...huh? 23:38, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken nose colour-- Night  shine  02:27, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading between the legs. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 21:15, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight a little. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  21:27, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  05:41, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, people! Thanks to Scarletwind, I did this. She said it hadn't been worked on in a long time. ^_^ ✳   YatzSliversword   Let it snow...  ✳ 12:50, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  16:26, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Please please don't. This is my first chance at an approved charart. ✳  YatzSliversword   Let it snow...  ✳ 16:28, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

...Um... Reuploaded. Can I still work on this? 17:20, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you can. Darken the nose colour-- Night  shine  23:10, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading down by the paws, left haunch, and tail. I can't see the lineart. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 15:51, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it should be lightened. I can see it fine. Darkhallows... Mew? 20:16, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ya keep it dark. He is a black cat. Make the nose black. 01:11, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a patch of shading on the lower chest above the forelegs, that isn't continued on down. Either get rid of the patch or continue it into the space of belly between the legs. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 21:55, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going out soon, so I'll get to this tomorrow. 21:12, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt. Apprentice) - Approved
Oh, meow. Cinderpelt, with a deformed leg, as an apprentice. I tried my new style with shading, then blurred it. Honestly it's better than before. The earpink didn't work so well for me. Comments? 00:45, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and straighten it out a little (if that makes sense) and blur the haunch highlight. 01:47, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the highlights. 01:54, December 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded: Straightened the ear pink; blurred, and blurred the highlights as well. Constructments? 01:56, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to be long-haired. 04:45, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. 03:15, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- 18:47, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

It has been a week since Icestorm has reuploaded this. May I take over? 01:41, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a few more days-- 15:53, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Icestorm's computer broke. She might not be back for about 10 more days. 16:38, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, do I have permission to take over? Is it possible you could ask her? Or, shall we wait? 16:42, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

We should wait. 20:52, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work-- 00:21, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

I am reposting this, Icestorm's computer had only just began working again. 23:04, January 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I'll get started right away. 17:25, January 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Re-Uploaded: Done. 15:43, January 9, 2011 (UTC)
 * Blur the highlights and the earpink. 16:41, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be bigger and triangular, and the highlights blurred. It looks great though! 18:35, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks Great! Just darken the image a little more so it looks more like her other chararts. 18:46, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, they just look like circles of pale gray. Mist fire I'd like fries with that 14:47, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Someone can take over on this since Ice has left for a little while-- night  shine  ❄ 02:07, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do it! Ravensoul101 02:36, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger, and more blurred.

Blur the shading. Brighten and make the earpink into a more triangular shape. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:34, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten** --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:09, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Are you working on this, Ravensoul? --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:21, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ravensoul e-mailed me last night and told me that the wiki isn't letting him edit anything. It happened to me once, but it only lasted a day. 00:47, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hi-lites on the shoulder and haunch.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:14, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is unnaturally bright, tone it down a bit. 21:13, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

If Ravensoul still isn't able to edit this, I think somebody else should take over. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:16, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Test... Test... Ravensoul101 15:35, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It works! Yay! I'll work on it. I'm going to re-do the highlights and shading ompleatly. They really aren't workin for me. BRB Ravensoul101 15:37, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

If you're up to it maybe you could add just a tiny bit of a paw on the other side of the haunch? It looks like there's actually no leg right now XD --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:03, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Can you help me with the blurring? Pixlr is KILLING me. Ravensoul101 02:58, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. I'll do that right now. If you really hate pixlr, though, you can download GIMP for free. That's what I use, and it's wonderful XD --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:05, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it a bunch. There was also some blurred lineart that I fixed, which meant I had to change the earpink a bit. Hope that's okay. Did I help? --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:46, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

The line art on the far foot is too thick, also I suggest you get rid of the clump of black pixels around the hind foot-- Night  shine  16:47, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wildheart- My dad won't let me download it, and, thanks a ton! Ravensoul101 03:38, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't really look like her leg is deformed. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 22:09, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it's a little hard since it's the hind leg on the other side, but I guess I can make it a little curved. Ravensoul101 04:51, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried my best.... :S Ravensoul101 16:42, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading so it's fading smoothly into the pelt.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  05:00, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and try to make the foot lineart curling up, like her medicine cat charart --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:20, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--- Night  shine  02:26, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm back! Had to buy a new computer. My three-year-old sister snapped some wires, and it died. Got a new one, and re-uploaded. Can somone help me a little more with blurring? Ravensoul101 03:42, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

The foot lineart looks great! Too bad about your computer. I suppose I could help if you want... --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:02, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please! Ravensoul101 04:10, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred to the max. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:58, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten highlights.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  16:35, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Wildheart! Ravensoul101 16:41, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Right now this looks kind of like half of the image is dark and the other half is light, so try to give it more dimension. Night shine  23:09, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred it as much as pixlr would let me. Help? Ravensoul101 01:34, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Still needs a lot more blurring. Want me to do it in GIMP for you? Darkhallows... Mew? 21:17, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please! Ravensoul101 00:27, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Darkhallows... Mew? 04:48, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

The whiskers seem like they've been elongated or blurred. Also, I think the shading could be blurred more. 00:00, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. A) - Approved
first carart project cat *Wildfire* 23:53, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches, and make them a pale gray so the shading will show up. Darken the shading under the chin and on his left foreleg and hind leg. Darken the ear-pink. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 23:55, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rainbreath already has this reserved so it will be declined-- 23:57, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

My mistake, Rainbreath has his kit image reserved. No one else has this currently reserved so it is fine. Rename this Berrynose.apprentice.alt.png. Blur the patches of white and darken the shading.-- 23:58, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

um.. no she reserved the alt. kit*Wildfire* 00:02, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the tail, and make the stump look the the warrior image. 00:06, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad! Blur the shading, there is too much of a *searches for word* difference, if you know what I mean. Mist fire I'd like fries with that 01:11, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

do i get rid of the tail or not and how do i reupload it*Wildfire* 02:05, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

get rid of the tail. You re-upload it by left clicking on the image, clicking on 'open link' and then going to the bottom of the page it takes you to and clicking 'upload new verson', or some saying like that. 02:53, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

i would also like to join project carart*Wildfire* 03:13, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded*Wildfire* 03:17, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail look more natural like in his apprentice charart. Blur the shading a ton and blur the earpink. 03:21, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white patches, make the ear pink more reddish, darken the shading-- 03:32, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *Wildfire* 15:47, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

can i join project carart? *Wildfire* 15:49, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *Wildfire* 16:23, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure I'll add you in. Smudge the white patches. Darken the shading a lot, especially on the white areas. Darken the ear pink-- 19:58, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

what else do i need before the 24 hrs. can start?*Wildfire* 22:09, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Um, what Nightshine said above your comment? And it's not that easy, you know. Most chararts need truckloads of work, and just a couple re-uploads won't get you very far. Should I also suggest blurring the white patch on the muzzle more? It looks sort of unnatural right now. -- 22:40, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

okay, sorry *Wildfire* 22:48, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

No, no. It's not your fault. I'm just saying, don't get too impatient with yourself, 'kay? :3 -- 22:52, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

yah i understand but i was being a little rude*Wildfire* 23:04, January 10, 2011 (UTC) 

Make the skinny gray area between the forearm and the chest white and darken the shading there. Smudge all the white patches, darken the ear pink, blur the shading and highlights-- 01:38, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded*Wildfire* 01:03, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white transition, make the gray area in front of his fore arm white, blur the shading and highlights, -- 04:13, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *Wildfire* 21:54, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. 00:55, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *Wildfire* 15:37, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading some more and brighten the earpink. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 22:49, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Rename it Berrynose.apprentice.alt.png please :) 21:44, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

i don't know how i tried but couldn't so how do i rename it *Wildfire* 00:26, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

You reupload the image with the correct name. 02:53, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

i dont know how could you please help*Wildfire* 02:12, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

okay i got it*Wildfire* 22:02, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading and highlights more consistent. 06:30, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink some. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:28, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

This technique of shading looks awesome! Only blur the shading a bit.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  03:50, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded *Wildfire* 17:13, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and shoulder. 19:10, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink some more. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:32, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined-- Night  shine  01:01, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

sorry i will get to work Wild  fire  03:40, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded Wild  fire  03:47, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the bottom of the haunch shading, lighten the earpink, and blur the shading some more. Better, though =) --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:50, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I suppose since Wildfire's leaving =( this means this is up for grabs. Speak now or forever hold you peace, people. --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:58, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

-speaks- I will do et! xD 16:21, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

i said kittycat or nightshine could have it sorry Wild  fire  16:31, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Wildfire, you don't really have a say over that. There's a lot of new users who haven't even done a single charart, and this is one of their only opportunities. 17:58, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs is right, any user who isn't currently working on a charart can take over on this-- Night  shine  16:45, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

So...I can do it? 17:48, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you can. :) 19:14, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:50, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There is some colour outside of the line art, fix that, get rid of the clump of black on the hindfoot, darken the shading, take the line art from Berrynose's apprentice image for the tail. Add some more white areas, add ear pink-- Night  shine  23:27, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bah, I think I made it worse. 23:26, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches and shading and brighten the earpink so it shows up more. 173.183.120.76 02:54, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

(computer logged me out. that was me, sorry) --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:25, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added more white and redid the shading. 22:10, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and maybe lighten the gray a tad. 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading, I think it looks too dark now. 21:10, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks pretty dark on the white part on his head. Lighten it a little. 04:43, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the white patches, get rid of the gray speckles around the charart, and the shading just looks more like a darker shade of gray rather than shading. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 02:39, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried a different style, a back light source. 22:30, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Just darken the light pixles on his right paw. 04:19, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about the bits of grey around him, it's the way I shade. 20:33, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and eye colour. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:37, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

The white looks too gray.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  03:29, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I understand that the gray is shading but 1) hardly any white spots 2) just barely blur the shading, hardly <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  01:01, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

There is so much shading on the white it looks gray, and the white markings don't look natural- just like one big swooping line down the cat, if you know what I mean. 05:26, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added more white, and redid the shading again. 16:43, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The gray and white areas just don't look natural. Try looking up a picture of a gray-and-white cat to get ideas. Lighten the ear pink a bit. Night shine  05:15, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the comment, Nightshine. I think finding a ref helped a bit. c: 22:43, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add some gray to the fore arms, lighten the ear pink a bit, smudge the gray parts, lighten the white areas-- Night  shine  02:26, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nightshine, what do you mean about adding gray to the forearms? They're supposed to be white. 00:34, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

It will give the charart a more balanced look-- Night  shine  00:16, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gave him gray 'socks', it's a marking that's natural with cats. Is that alright? 01:03, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the gray markings and darken the shading-- Night  shine  01:58, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smudged around the white markings, is this what you meant? 22:03, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Inbetween his left legs, there's a few pixels that are a grey-ish color. Make these transparent. 16:56, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I got rid of most, if not all of the grey pixels. 22:52, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the gray transition, give the image more dimension; it's really flat right now-- Night  shine  23:09, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I smudged it a lot. How, exactly, would I make the image have more dimension? 17:36, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

That means to make the image look realistic, 3D looking. 20:10, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white bits. And perhaps blur rather than smudge. Darkhallows... Mew? 20:21, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more. --  Moon  leaf  20:21, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I ended up redoing the image. better? 21:41, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and try and blur the gray on the haunch. 00:54, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried a different style of shading. Made the ear pink a bit smaller. The gray on the haunch is blurred to the max. 21:51, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading, lighten the ear pink a bit, Night  shine  23:14, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:23, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the gray/white transition if it cant be blurred any more. 20:00, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

erase the gray speckles by his muzzle. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 13:14, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:27, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Really good for a first charart (i'm probably not the first to say that). The gray and white look almost too smudged together. Try blurring it as hard as you can. Remember to keep the blur strength at one hundred...but the brush is nice and small. If it can't be blurred anymore...just try and smudge it so it looks more natural and smoothed. :)    Tawny       tastic  YOUR JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!! 19:27, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:13, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely! Blur the shading on the tail a bit more and the gray around his face. <font color="#46d686">Scarlet <font color="#149b50">wind <font color= "#7da8d8">Step into the <font color="#4b78aa">Light 22:31, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt(Alt. W)- Approved
I did the best I could, but idk... 01:12, January 22, 2011 (UTC)Mintstarr (Talk)

I moved this to the right section. I don't see her being mentioned as cream coloured in the trivia night  shine  ❄ 01:15, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I believe this is for her tawny colored alternate. The reference is I believe on page 3 of Midnight. 02:55, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Assuming this has a correct reference for now: Tawnypelt should be more ginger or orange-colored; this looks too brown/cream. The earpink is too small and too light, make it dark redder and a tad larger. Add a clearly visible highlight to the tail, and brighten the highlights. Darken the shading, make it thicker, and blur them thoroughly. In my opinion, the ear could use a slight highlight; it looks a little dark right now. -- 02:59, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll add that to her trivia. As for the image, blur the highlights and shading, make the ear pink more reddish. Right now this looks cream colour and it should be tawny (ginger) -- night  shine  ❄ 03:00, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Tawnypelt.warrior.alt.png 09:19, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I will fix all of this, but did I do the shading right? Mintstarr (Talk) 14:30, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine :P The ear pink needs to be redon badly, it looks more like a circle right now. Blur the shading on the front leg a bit. Other then that, nice work. 17:06, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I can't reupload the file because I'm getting a message saying, file type verification error. Mintstarr (Talk 17:59, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better? Mintstarr (Talk) 19:26, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight down and it still needs to be more orange. Make the ear pink smaller and more red, and blur the shading. 19:33, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to know what color she should be look at her alternate kit image. Also, blur the tail shading and make the shoulder highlight more oval shaped. 21:27, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, scratch that with the alternate kit. Just do what Iceheart said and make it more ginger. ;) 21:31, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could still be darker. The earpink looks unnatural, fix that, please. It should be darker red and more saturated, as well as more consistent and more evenly dark. Also shade her midriff, please. -- 21:20, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I don't think I shaded the midriff right. I made more ginger and made her earpink smaller and redder. Mintstarr (Talk) 23:10, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton and darken the earpink. The midriff shading should be from the middle of her back to her stomach. 01:01, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I fixed the earpink and shading. Mintstarr (Talk) 23:19, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more and perhaps make her a bit more tawny (gingery brown) --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:03, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- the shading has been blurred. Mintstarr (Talk) 22:08, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be more tawny-coloured. Tawny is a gingery-brown, whereas this is more of a pale yellowy-ginger. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:33, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it is gingery-browner. Mintstarr (Talk)Mintstarr 01:10, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

It could still be more ginger, and blur the shading. 01:41, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it is more ginger and the shading has been blurred Mintstarr (Talk) 22:31, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

It should still be more richer ginger. Is this your idea of ginger? This is mango. Take a look at Tawnypelt's alternate kit image or Cherrykit's image to get an idea, Mintstarr. You've been asked to make this image ginger many times, and I still don't think you've gotten the idea. Thanks, -- 23:17, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Also, you've named it wrong. Please rename it Tawnypelt.warrior.alt, thanks. -- 23:21, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's so much the ginger aspect she's missing, but the brown. Right now it's a ginger. A pale ginger, but a ginger nonetheless. You need to make it a little more brown. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 23:50, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hi-lites. Mist fire I'd like fries with that 02:19, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I borrowed the pelt color from her alternate kit image so if it isn't tawny I was lied to. Mintstarr 18:14, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

(sigh) Mintstarr, I made Tawnypelt's alternate kit image, and you weren't "lied to". -_- It still could be a tad more saturated. Try comparing it again:



See how it looks a tad more ginger? That's the color I think Tawnypelt's alternate warrior image should be. I hope you understand! :) Thanks, -- 19:37, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Her alternate kit image wasn't tawny-colored though. it was pale ginger like Goldenflower. It needs to be more brownish and the shading needs to be blurred a ton. 00:56, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it should be more ginger. User:Mintstarr 01:03, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to be more brown, right now it just looks yellow. This is the color of a tawny-colored cat: link. The shading still needs to be blurred too. 01:22, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  19:16, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- more brown or more ginger? sigh... Mintstarr (Talk) 23:38, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red, blur the shading, and maybe darken the entire image to make it look more likr the kit. 19:12, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows that? Mintstarr (Talk) 00:27, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

The image still needs to be a light brown. I wouldn't use the kit image as a referance, because it's ginger. Also, make the earpink a tad smaller, it's kinda falling out of the ear right now, and blur the shading on her haunch. 01:17, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Sasha doesn't have this pelt color and she is a tawny cat. Mintstarr 17:35, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink duller and this still needs to be brown-er. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:27, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Mintstarr (Talk) Mintstarr 20:54, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this really needs to be browner. Here is a picture of a tawny-coloured cat. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 00:11, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading. 01:15, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

The hi-lites seem to be just... there, when they should be smoothly flowing into the pelt.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:53, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I found the colors off the internet so which one is tawny-er, excluding highlights and shading? Mintstarr (Talk) Mintstarr 16:38, February 5, 2011 (UTC)



The one on the right, but it would need to be a little lighter, and not as orange-y. The one on the left is too cream-colored. 16:43, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Rainlegs. Would be much better. =) --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y undefined)Mintstarr 16:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)m y t h o u g h t s. 23:31, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Mintstarr (Talk Mintstarr 16:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

A little less orange, and a tad more brown, but other then that, tou have the right idea. :) 16:41, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-  Mintstarr (Talk) Mintstarr 19:29, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

The Ear-Pink I personally think looks to red. Try to brighten it and make it more pinkish.♥♥♥Valentine♥♥♥ 19:49, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Enlarge the highlights and blur them. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:23, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm having trouble uploading the new image. I'll upload it, change it to full size, and the I get a screen telling me a photo with the same name (old one) already exists. When I click, "overwrite the existing photo with yours," the old one shows up again instead of the new one. Help please. Mintstarr (Talk) Mintstarr 18:29, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry. It almost always takes forever for the photo to update itself. Right now it's a pretty brown color, but just lighten it a tad. You're almost there. :) 01:21, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I lightened it a tad.<span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:khaki;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  03:24, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. 22:11, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:khaki;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  17:18, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thats better...the highlighting on the back and paws could probably be just a little bit lighter 23:32, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes,I agree with Mistystar. The paws and back could use a little more highlighting 23:54, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink so it's color doesn't blend with the pelt so much, and blur the shading. 01:15, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- should be fixed<span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:khaki;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  16:10, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

You need to name the image 'Tawnypelt . warrior . alt' 16:14, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the chest highlight and add some highlights to the front legs. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:54, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better? I'm seeing the original picture so it might be loading?<span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:khaki;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  00:42, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:17, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- could someone tell me how to tell if the shading, highlights, and earpink need to be blurred (any image, not being specific)<span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:khaki;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  00:06, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mostly it's if your shading or highlights or earpink looks really obvious, if you know what I mean? The shading/earpink/highlights need to look soft, like they were created by the sun, not by your computer =) Like if there are straight lines or if it just all around looks like you USED a pixellated brush to make the highlights/shading/earpink? I don't really know how to explain it. Hope I helped... --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:19, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur or lighten where the highlights meet the shading by the chest a tad. 00:11, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- it'll be up in a second I'm experimenting<span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:khaki;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  00:29, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good! Blur the hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:50, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

And the shading. And fix it so the earpink is not touching the lineart. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:17, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Should be better <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:khaki;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  Don't startle that Witch!  00:54, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, I realized this photo has gone a day without comments, so should it of been approved? <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  01:05, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

No, a lead must say CBA? for it to be in the twenty-four hour stage. Make the earpink more noticeable and make the shading more consistent. 99.58.17.98 21:01, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

More consistent?<span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  22:00, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think s/he means that it's darker in some places, and lighter in others, so even it out. Blur the shading, add neck shading, and blur the highligts, too. Also, this is a very fluorescent shade of ginger, for a pale ginger cat. Lighten her. 05:21, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, is this an alt for her being described as tawny coloured? Tawny is light brown, not ginger! 05:23, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shoulder highlight.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:30, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Would someone mind fixing the shading so it could be more consistent as that contributor said? I'm not sure I could. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  21:20, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Fixed everything but the consistency, which I'll need help with. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  01:55, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and define the ear pink, blur the highlights-- Night  shine  05:14, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  23:50, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more, desturate it, blur the highlights-- Night  shine  02:24, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

You might want to blur the shading a bit too. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 15:30, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- should be better. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  00:32, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe give her amber eyes since she was described with those too. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 04:18, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Otherwise, looks pretty :) 23:29, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- someone is doing Oakheart as a tawny alternate farther down this page and the pelt colors of my charart and their's don't look the same. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  14:51, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights, define the ear pink Night  shine  23:27, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by define? (This is Mintstarr, but I'm in a hurry so I can't log in.) 75.91.245.189 13:53, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

She means to make the ear pink stand out more, so that it doesn't clash with the pelt color. All you have to do is just make the ear pink either lighter or darker, you might want to make it lighter. River pelt StarClan's Chosen One XD 20:13, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- When will this just get approved :(? <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  21:21, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mintstarr, some chararts are up for months. You just need to be patient :P. Lighten the earpink and blur the shading. 00:06, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make this less orange? It's supposed to be tawny.

Reuploaded- the shading doesn't look right to me but I'm not sure why. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  22:27, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I fixed it up a little. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  22:34, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blurr the highlights on the hauch and shoulder Feathermoon 23:32, March 7, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Add highlights to her left front leg, blur the shading around the haunch, and make the ear pink more triangular, it looks ovalish. 22:18, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- should be better. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINpan style="color:orange;"&gt;I was a child, always with something to prove. A chip on my shoulder. 23:23, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not being rude, but really wondering, and my patience is starting to go away, how is this supposed to be approved if Nightshine is the only lead on? <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  22:57, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can approve other images easily, but for my own images another lead has to say it's ready. As for this image, lighten the ear pink so it's easier to see and smudge/blur the highlights-- Night  shine  23:07, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Some images have red areas showing what needs to be fixed. If the shading or highlights need to be blurred, could someone show me one of those? <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  02:28, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

The blue areas are where shading still needs to be blurred a little, and the red is where I had concerns with the highlights. The tail, face, and hind paw highlights are brighter then the others, and I was wondering: Why are there highlights on the back paws, and not the front? Hope this [VERY] sloppy guide helps. :) 03:13, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Center and make the ear pink more red. 01:17, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Sorry it took so long. Anyways, fixed everything that should be fixed. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  19:37, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

If the shading/highlights need to be blurred more, a user who uses GIMP needs to do it because I use Pixlr and that's about as much as I can blur it. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  17:42, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Darkhallows... Mew? 21:21, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Try and make the earpink more noticeable. Maybe try darkening it? And maybe try making the shading more consistent because the shading by the midsection is a lot darker than the rest of the shading.

Reuploaded- Someone wanna help me with the consistency? <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  22:44, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry that was me. XD 23:03, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help with the shading, and I'll also fix the ear pink since it's too dark-- Night  shine  23:04, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I did what I could Night  shine  23:14, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, repeating CBA. Darkhallows... Mew? 04:50, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Nightshine! <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">MINTSTARR  That peaceful Hawaiian breeze....  16:44, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

I still can't really see the earpink, try and use a darker red-pink color. 01:46, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:orange;">MINTSTARR  That peaceful Hawaiian breeze....  01:55, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink on cats this color are next to impossible. I'd just leave it, because it will always be too pale, or too bright. Darkhallows... Mew? 07:55, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Brook (alt.W) ~ Approved


Brook, as described on page 216 of Sunset. Comments? 23:39, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, make the ear pink less purply, and make sure that the shading and highlights are on the stripes. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 00:09, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, and the earpink is kind of crooked. And the stripes look like they're overlapping onto the lineart.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:19, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Definatly blur the stripes, darken the shading a tad, shrink the earpink so it's not hanging out of the ear, and make it a more natural, darker color. Also, fix the lineart, because the stripes are covering the lineart, and there's some weird white stripes on her tail-tip. 00:32, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 17:33, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can a cat be gray and have brown stripes? Also, center the ear pink. 23:47, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, it does seem weird. I checked again, and it said gray-brown. so should it be gray and brown, or solid colored? 23:52, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes still need blurring...  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:57, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

But if it says gray-brown, would it mean gray-brown as a solid color, or mixed colors/tabby? 17:09, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. (blurred stripes) 18:19, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! But I do think that the color is a solid gray-brown instead of tabby. 01:41, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Shrink the earpink a tad, darken it a little, (So it isn't such an un-natural color) and I agree with Nightflower. 02:43, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''I didn't change the color though; I think it looks fine as a tabby, but if more people think it should be solid colored, I'll change it. 19:21, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not officially a member yet, but I couldn't help commenting. Is it just me, or is the eye plain white? I thought that was a bit odd... Paleclaw 02:01, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I checked Brook's page and her alternate description was 'gray-brown', not gray and brown tabby striped. Also, the ear pink is a bit. . . ummm. . .lumpy looking and it's very purple-ish. I can see that her eye isn't plain white, but it is a very light shade of gray so darken it. The lineart is also smeared where some of the stripes are. Considering all that you have to change, removing the stripes, changing her eye colour. . . I would suggest just redoing it. 05:12, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll re do it. I did gray and brown instead of gray-brown, because I didn't think there would actually be a gray brown color, since they are so diffferent, but I'll try. 16:44, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? 17:03, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are looking a little blotchy. Smooth them, and lighten the face highlight to match the shoulder and haunch.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  03:29, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make this a little more brown-ish. The ear pink should be a more red colour, the line art is blurred in a few areas and it looks thin on the chest.-- Night  shine  05:27, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too triangular. Blur it please >:D 15:41, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

That doesn't look like the right earpink color. Blur highlights. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:turquoise;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">MINTSTARR  You have a sailor's mouth!  21:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink to the middle of the ear. 02:38, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Re-Uploaded. Comments? 23:08, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be more red. Echostar229 04:57, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink a little bit upper. 11:24, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is centered already, but I'll change the color more redder. 22:57, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Comments? 23:28, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink some. There's something wrong with the lineart on the bottom of the chest and on the front left leg (her left) --   Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 05:06, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Oh, I never noticed. I'll fix it later :D 22:44, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

It just looks dark grey now, make it more brown. 02:50, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. I'll change that now. 22:46, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. Comments? '''Sorry for being impatient, but I think thats good enough and doesn't need more fixing, but thats just my opinion... 22:59, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

The line art is thin in many places, I can fix it if you'd like. Move the ear pink up and desaturate it. Darken the shading and make this a little more brownish-- Night  shine  00:07, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Can you do it for me, please? 00:15, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded okay. You just need to darken the shading, make the ear pink more reddish, and move the ear pink up-- Night  shine  00:21, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you so much! I'll do that right away! 00:25, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Is it good enough now? 00:32, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, darken the shading around the midriff, the neck, and base of the tail-- Night  shine  00:40, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. '''Better? 00:48, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay now there is just a really dark brown side and a gray side. Give the charart a more life-like look by making the shading thinner around the muscles, or something like that. The shading should go around the areas that stick out more-- Night  shine  00:59, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so I darken the shading around the muscles? I'll try that. 01:02, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. What do you think? 01:07, March 5, 2011 (

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Lighten the whole thing, lighten the highlights, make it more bdfrownish-- Night  shine  01:13, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Please, is it good enough? I might not be able to come on next week, so I hope it gets approved soon. XD 01:15, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a bit and blur them, make the ear pink more reddish and blur that too-- Night  shine  23:24, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. 00:41, March 6, 2011 (UTC)'''

The pelt looks blotchy, blur the pelt. Feathermoon 00:53, March 6, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Yes, the pelt does look a little blotchy. As Feathermoon said,blur it more. 02:12, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

No need to repeat it twice XD RE-Uploaded. 02:55, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it some more. Make the shading look more like the image that Nightshine posted. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 07:21, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried, but if someone could help me it would be nice :D 75.6.240.3 21:36, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help!! (Wildheart who is on a school computer XD)

Reuploaded I changed the shading according to Nighshine's picture. If you don't like it, feel free to revert the edit XD Also, you had some blurred lineart in the ear that I fixed. Unfortunately, I had to change the earpink to do so. Hope it looks good. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 01:58, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is this image a very dark-gray, not grey-brown? Can you make it lighter? 02:03, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks gray-brown to me... but this is up to Mistystar. --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:34, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I agree, this looks very gray now. Make it a lot more brown -- Night  shine  02:53, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would you suggest something like this colour, Nightshine? --> --  Wildheart  L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:23, March 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that one looks good-- Night  shine  05:32, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Give her amber eyes, since she was described with those too, move the highlight up a tad higher on her forehead, and make the ear pink a tad smaller. <font color="#d73f17">Scarlet <font color="#65c9d2">wind <font color= "#1756d7">Medicine Cat of <font color="#121bcf">SolarClan 03:39, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is really nice! --  Moon  leaf  23:43, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thx. Sorry I've been really inactive lately; but I'm back from my camping trip!!! I'll reupload it! 23:56, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm pretty sure its good enough, comments? 00:07, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken or blur the highlights.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">1000 Edits!  16:47, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the haunch shading-- Night  shine  17:58, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

She has been described with amber eyes, says so in the trivia, so make that the eye color. It's an idea. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:lime;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">MINTSTARR  There is a traitor among us...  20:06, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes are amber. I'll re-upload it now. 21:52, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

RE-Uploaded. Good enough now? 21:56, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's looks a bit like gray. Would this color work? -->2. or something like this: 1. Feathermoon 23:30, March 14, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Its supposed to be gray-brown. Since she is brown, it makes sense to look a bit gray. XD Anyway, is everything else good? 21:49, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the shading/highlights seem a bit blotchy. 01:27, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. But seriously, after that, I think there's nothing else wrong with it. 20:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well then. Re-Uploaded. Is it ready now? 20:33, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more and make the hioghlights bigger. Move the shoulder highlight up too. 21:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. 21:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Now? 21:07, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to re-do this. The haunch highlight is very blotchy. --  Moon  leaf  01:23, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. huh, could someone help me fix it? I fail at hauch hilights. 01:35, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I can... but I might have to re-do all of the shading in order for it not to get all messed up. 01:40, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. that's fine. 209.188.162.10 19:29, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I did the shading like this because the other way like you had before wasn't turning out too good... but you can always change the shading if you want. :P 21:48, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Its great! Thanks, Rainy! 22:00, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay now it looks like half of it is brown and the other is gray. Add more dimension to this, make the ear pink smalled and desturate it -- Night  shine  00:48, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 00:16, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Highlight the tail. 00:33, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

The tail doesn't need hilights. ~ Mistystar who's not logged in

It still looks as if one side is brown and the other is gray. Refer to the shading redline I put up earlier, Make the ear pink smaller and blur it. Night shine  19:02, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look like its brown/gray in my opinion, and besides, its supposed to be gray brown, so why shouldn't it be like that? 207.62.246.71 21:30, March 20, 2011 (UTC)