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Featherwhisker (Ki) - Declined
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Dull and blur the highlights, please.-- 00:45, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:51, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing. 19:21, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

They're showing for me. I don't know what the problem is, if it's on your end or what... 17:27, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the light on <-- visible leg.

Re-uploaded 14:37, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded fixing shading 14:40, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Is it my screen, or is there a square on her chest? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

I'm trying to fix that. 15:46, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. gosh 15:53, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. WAAASTEEE also featherwhisker is a dood 15:56, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs? You're doing great! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:56, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i just want this to be approved tbh 16:20, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't worry you're getting there. Blur all the shading a bunch, and lighten it a shade or two on the right side > 20:10, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. mmm delicious shading 03:57, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading, that's all I can say about this lovely image right now ^^ you did a brilliant job. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:20, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Also, is the shading layer above the eyes? Because the eyes seem to have shading too. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:21, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, it is. Do you want me to fix that? 23:15, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:19, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading; it’s also leaking away from the lineart. Also, can you put the lineart above the rest? It’s supposed to be pure black. Other than that, this is so adorable! --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Im sorry, but i think this will most likely be declined soon due to the one month limit =(.-- 06:00, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Although you're right, please keep in mind, Breezeheart, that saying that is not your place. A project lead are the only users allowed to say that- just like asking if you're still working, CBA'ing, ect. Sorry, Gia, I don't have a choice.

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
omg don't kill me for ruining Sparrow's images please 18:30 Tue Dec 9

Thin out the pale chest and define the shadin. This looks nice! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pale chest edges into the fur more. He looks amazing, you did a fine job, Amber! 00:42, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the ear pink more. You made him purrty :) The Fox Girl (talk) 02:51, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

the pale part on his face should only go up to his nose. 04:29, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks everybody ^-^ 18:03 Wed Dec 10

Define shading. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:30, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is dark enough. In fact, I think it could be lightened up a tad. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:31, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

It needs to be defined, defining doesn't just mean darkening. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:33, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading a bit? I can't see the pattern through the shading. Nice job Amber. ^^ 01:52, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Just saw that Fox said that already. ^^ 01:58, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Still working?

Oops, forgot to reup ^^ 12:55 Mon Dec 15

Thin out the pale chest, also lighten it up to match his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 14:00, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up his shading, I can't see his pattern through it at all.-- 00:35, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Also, he needs a collar since he was a kittypet back then. Am I right? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:20, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

You would be correct, Fox. ^^ If they were kittypets when they were kits, then they should get the kittypet collar unless otherwise stated.

Reupssssssssss 17:35 Fri Dec 19

Lighten the shading on the left side of his body. So cute :3 (I like the collar) 17:46, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the collar lineart on this -> side of the body? 18:35, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still workin'? 16:54, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah sorry I've been extremely sick so yep reups 10:05 Wed Dec 24

Mind defining the light on his tail? Looking good :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:25, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Burnt, honestly it's fine, it's probably just the dark base color. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:27, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, I think it could be defined. It almost looks black right now. 16:56, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Personally, I think the pale chest could be lightened up a bunch and the tabby stripes can be defined. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:08, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with the chest... But I can see the tabby stripes clearly. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:46, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

The only stripes I can’t see is left of his head, can you fix that? Also, I can’t tell if there is a pale patch on the tail, maybe lighten that patch? I think this is really well done! --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki)~ For Approval
Woo~  First white cat (I really hope I did this right I don't wanna redo another charart :/) 11:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define ur light source. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:48, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up, too. It's making the white look pretty gray. 13:41, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

She's not supposed to be white. She should be a light color, hence why she looks off-white. The base from the kittypet is #E3E5E2. I'm also gonna rename this for you, since it should be File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png.

Should I change the pelt color then and reup? 11:17, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I suggest you to color pick off the apprentice image and just change the base color. The Fox Girl (talk) 13:18, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks hard edged, maybe blur it more? Then define it everywhere. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Meh that would put her back to where she is now. Just blur the edge of the shading dear, that should fix it up and save you a lot of stress. But define the depth just a tad, like darken it where the creases are and where there would be less light. You're doing wonderfully~ 02:33, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. The left paw and main body is telling me its coming from the <--- while the right paw and tail are telling me it's coming from --->. The head could use a little bit of shading, aswell. Perhaps just switch aroound the foreleg shading; or switch the tail or main body shading. 00:34, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Sorry I haven't been uploading recently. School, the upcoming holiday, bleh.. 14:09, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey, just as a head's up, don't align the images. It messes up the sections if too many are done at the same time. Define the light just a bit on <-- front leg.

Reups Gah sorry I must've not been paying attention 14:29, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Try adding some highlights or something- she's looking a bit on the grey side. This is very nice for a first white cat, though. ^^ 03:14 Fri Dec 19

Nevermind, I didn't see that she's supposed to be light-coloured, not white. Anyways, maybe define the shading just a little?

Reups Sorry about the confusion lol 14:42, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and chest shading a bit. ^^ 19:14, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, tbh. I can see them both clearly. Can you blur the shading a tad more, please?-- 06:11, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 13:55, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add more light to the tail? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:06, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Eh I think it looks fine. If she added more light, someone would tell her to define the shading on it again. 16:58, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think a bit more light wouldn't hurt. It does appear awfully dark.

Jessy (Ki) ~ For Approval
I really meant for this to be up earlier whoops 18:43, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Make the collar larger, as it'd be pretty big on a kit. This is pretty! 22:46, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

The size itself is fine. Given that there are some pretty thin collars out there, they'd still appear "normal" sized on a kit. It's clear that this collar is too big for Millie because of how it's positioned. If it were too small, then it would probably be moved. This is also the lineart from my version of Millie's kit, and I was told that the size itself was okay to use.

The collar is fine. Define the shading on the left foreleg, please. 00:31, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:56, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on her right side is a bit dark compared to her front legs' shading, maybe lighten it up a bit? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:19, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading over there is fine, but I think the shading on the front legs could be defined, as I can't see it too well. 14:38, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still workin', Shoon? 01:29, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yep. I defined the shading, but I won't define it anymore, because that'll make it look too dark. 01:50, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

The collar shading is contradicting the chosen lightsource. And after you flip it around define the collar shading. 20:08, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:40, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Dustpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
Ok, I don't know if chararts can be done in a day, but anyway, this is my first charart! I used PAINT.NET for this one. He's so cute! How can I improve? This is my first charart, so I may not be familiar with everything. BTW, how to make background color disapperar? I had trouble with that. Hope this helps! FireTail101 (talk) 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sign your posts with four tides plz. To remove the background, select the linear art, copy it, paste it onto ur base color layer, then use the magic wand tool and delete the background with control+x. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 23:58, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Plz match his other images by adding stripes as well. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups

The stripes are already there, just dark. U probably couldn't see them because of background. FireTail101 (talk) 00:13, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color and define the shading. Not bad for ur first charart! If You had seen my first charart, you'd laugh your head off. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:17, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Colour pick from one of the other Dustpelt images. Just be careful not to colour pick a shaded spot. Also with PAINT.NET, I leave the layers and save as a .pdn, then save again as a .png and that will make it one layer, making it easier to edit the waste. I leave the .pdn as multiple layers so I can edit it easier. This is great for first try! --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Stealthfire, I colourpicked each color from Dustpelt's apprentice image. FireTail101 (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I still think it's a bit dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

He's way to dark. He looks like a black cat on my screen, tbh. You can use  this to colorpick from; Because right now, he's so dark to the point i cant even see his stripes or lineart.

Use the medium brown on the bottom left as your base; while using the paler brown beside it for his pale parts. The pink is for his ears; and the orange/yellow in the middle is for his eyes. The darkest brown is for his stripes. Also, his nose needs to be black/dark brown to match his other images. 00:30, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups FireTail101 (talk) 02:08, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define/darken the stripes? I really can't see them. You're doing well! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Sure. FireTail101 (talk) 16:57, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base coat a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:23, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups - Darkened the stripes and lightened the base. Firetail 22:53, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Also, in terms of image approval, when do I become an apprentice? FireTail101 (talk) 01:27, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

When a senior warrior thinks you're ready, they will promote you. For now, thin out and add more stripes to match his other images. 06:16, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are a bit slanted compared to his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:05, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a bunch as its looking pretty neon. Try color picking from the starclanner. Also define the pale chest as its barely noticeable on this compared to his other images. You're doing a great job! 20:04, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

So fix the stripes, add more stripes, dim the earpink, and define the pale color. Ok, sure. Thanks for all the comments! FireTail101 (talk) 01:19, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? The image looks the same as before. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:04, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think Firetail re-uploaded yet, I think he/she was just confirming out loud what we all just commented. I'm on mobile though so I can't see recent changes at the moment. 21:46, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Ya I didn't reup yet, though I'm going on vacation tomorrow and I'll try to reup tonight. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:51, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

BTW changed my signature from old boring default, its different. I'm a he  Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:54, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups IN A RUSH Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 02:14, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you curve the tabby stripes so that they flow with the curve of the body? 1:24 Sat Dec 27

Could you thin out the stripes they seem thinner on the other images. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   14:10, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

I'm back now, so I'll be able to reup today or tomorrow. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 14:49, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Stormcloud (Ki) ~ For Approval
pls tell me I'm done with this set now 13:47, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading overall, then smooth it out. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 13:49, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think just smoothing it out would solve the problem. It doesn't distort the pattern in any way, shape, or form, and I can see it just fine.

I think it could be lightened just a shade over on the farthest side to our right ---> because I think it messes with the color a tad, and I can't really see the pattern through it. The rest is fine. I think this is the last one in the set Shinx lol 14:34, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

This computer makes shading appear so daaaarrrkk I'm glad my guess was almost ok 15:11, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Could u possibly smooth out the tail shading? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:22, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups It already was smooth, but ok 12:57, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading more on the legs? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:47, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

She smudges not blurs^^ and I think the shading in the ears could be lightened a shade.

reups 19:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Smoothen the shading on the back toward the chest. Kinda looks cut off, if you know what I mean.. (Was Stormcloud a Kittypet?)   18:58, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, he was. And if I do smooth it out, then I won't be able to see it, so may I please ask for a second opinion on this? It was also done exactly the same way as I did on the other kit images. I think it's just because of the stripes, to be honest. 20:05, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think it looks fine Shinx^^ 20:44, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Would you chew me up if I told you to define the shading on the tail? I can't tell which parts are the stripes and which part is the shading. Ignore me if you think it's fine. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:45, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

this is the most i can do. 11:47, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
The kits taking over the world so here's a StarClanner :3 20:33, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

On the tail too. This is pretty! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups  Thanks:) 12:24, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the shading so it transitions more smoothly and blends better with the base. 20:00, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Rubblepaw 21:16, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Can I take over? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:59, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

You don't need to ask- you may take over if you don't have another project.

Re-uploaded I'll take over ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:56, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and lighten the shading on the tail. 10:10 Wed Dec 24

Re-ups There we go :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:23, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define your lightsource. The tail and back say > while the head and chest and legs say < 17:01, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

This image is cursed Could you lighten the shading a tad? It appears dark in some areas. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:09, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Shading on plain cats requires all your focus ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:38, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

The shading around the face/paws/shoulder looks a little funny. Could you reposition it so that it looks a little less...out of place? (I have no idea what I'm trying to say tbh) 16:43, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I understand so I'll try to clarify for ya^^ your shading needs to curve more with the body. It looks just kind of..put on there for lack of better wording. You need to place the shading where the light isn't touching, and have it curve to the body parts so it's not flat and not looking like it was just placed there for no reason. You can look at some of my images and you can see how the shading curves with the body. I'm horrid at explaining though so if I don't make sense im sorry. 21:34, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Used Burnt's account to re-up ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:30, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

There's a small streak of shading beside the shoulder that looks a little too hard-edged in comparison to the rest of the shading, so could you blur it? 06:14, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

There we go ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 06:18, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Could you darken the grey to match the other images? Colour pick the dark grey from the other images to get the ideal colour. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   14:11, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

re-up ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:33, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receeding on the stomach and left foreleg. -- 20:56, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:24, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Sunstar (W) ~ For Approval
I looovvvvvvvee Sunstar :p ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:12, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Hate to spoil it for you but the cite for a torn ear is very far into Bluestar's Prophecy, and he was only a warrior for a short amount of time at the start of the book, so can you remove the torn bit of the ear? --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:59, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, the cite is because he was addressed as a senior warrior. He was never once a warrior in Bluestar's Prophecy at all. I asked about the "senior warrior" cite counting for a warrior one, since the term 'warrior' was used, and that's why he gets it. Blur the tail shading.

Re-ups I was expecting that :| ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:19, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The shading seems to disappear on the haunch, like it was erased or something. Define the shading there please? 21:28, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:51, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

blur or lighten the bottom of the paws? This is awesome! --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks! :D ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:46, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) ~ For Approval
Yeah... I don't know.

Could you define the ear pink on this ==> ear? Nice job :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:17, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, it's the shading over it which is making it darker than <-- ear. 10:08 Wed Dec 24

I have to agree with my sis, I can barely see it. Maybe lighten the shading up over there or add some light? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:29, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Eh I can't see it too well, so just lighten the shading on that ear a shade or two. 21:42, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Lightened the shading on the --> ear.

Bird That Rides the Wind (Ki) ~ For Approval
why was the shading such a pain to do 02:04, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Would you mind if you defined the shading? She looks nice ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:09, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reups thanks c: 16:12, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a tad more. This is beautiful, Sorrel c: 04:18, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups merci 16:48, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes a little - they appear thicker (in places) on the elder. She's very pretty, you are very talented! — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   14:17, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, really. But I'll change unless someone else agrees (and thanks!) 02:14, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Did you tint the shading? I think Shelly used black for her other images that I'm aware of, and the color looks a tiny bit different on this.

It was only very dark brown 02:56, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Wind (Ki) ~ For Approval
Idk.-- 06:47, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too hard-edged. Perhaps smudge them? There's also a texture on the stripes for her other images- idk if you can tell or not.

Define the shading everywhere. damnit, I wanted this. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:07, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 06:16, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? It still looks hard edged. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:29, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I've smudged them as much as i can. If i smudge them some more, they'll start to look too soft/blurred. I can smudge them a little bit more if its needed, but i'd prefer not to. If you don't mind, i'd like to get a second opinion first. 08:44, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

They don't look smudged at all, though, when they need to be. I made the rogue image, I would know. They're much too hard-edged when you compare them to the other images. I don't think it's a matter of opinion on this one when they don't even look smudged to begin with.

Re-uploaded. Well, I can assure you they are smudged. I've smudged them a bit more and blurred it some. Hopefully, that helps. These images are so damn tiny >.>. 09:03, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Would you mind if you toned down the ear pink? It is very bright. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:46, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 10:57, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I still can't tell the stripes are smudged. If you have to thicken the stripes a bit, and then smudge them, so be it. But as they are now, they look much too sharp for it to match the others.

Raise the opacity and rate. Currently they do look pixely. Now I'm not sure if the smudging on the stripes has to match, but you could blur the edges and only the edges of the stripes. It would make them look less pixelated, but it'd have to be on a low opacity. But I'm on mobile so I cant tell if they were done a certain way. And if I don't make sense, ignore me. I'm very short on sleep @.@ 13:30, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Eh. 20:54, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading a little, I'm having trouble seeing it. 01:34, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Sandypaw (Ki) - For Approval
I luv his little eyebrows :D 22:30, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Haha he almost looks nervous. You did a lovely job with this =) 00:10, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks :3 He's cutely nervous :D 00:25, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can't see it at all. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:48, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Changed shading,now it's smudged 13:31, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Mind defining the light on the tail? This is lovely. :D ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:43, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks:) 15:24, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Benny (Ki) ~ For Approval
Um I tried to match but I guess it didn't work very well... oops. Not so proud of this one tbh. 23:59 Thu Dec 25

Them eyebrows make him look mad. Define his earpink a tad. This is really cute, Hawk ^^'.-- 05:58, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. :) 17:23 Fri Dec 26

I'm not sure if it's just my screen, but I still can't see the ear pink :/ feel free to ignore me if it looks fine. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:42, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is rather dull on his kittypet, so I'd rather not lighten it up anymore. If someone else agrees with you, however, I'll lighten it up some more. <span style="">17:17 Sat Dec 27

Maybe make it a tiny bit more pink? I think you did well to match it! --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine color-wise but if you can make it more visible on the black..I dunno I need to go back to bed lol 13:21, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Pebble (ki) ~ For Approval
she's cute.... 05:04, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Under all that mud is a pretty little kit! Who knew? XD Is there supposed to be light on the back paw? I’m just a bit confused with that is all. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah with that lightsource there'd be at least a bit of light peeking through inbetween the legs. 05:33, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Mottlepaw (Ki) ~ CBA
06:03, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Isn't there texture on the white? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:05, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

no that's his shading, I didn't do the same style shading back then. 06:07, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm having issues seeing what's going on with the tail oops. idk if it's just because of the coloring or my crappy screen, but I can't tell the shading and black apart. o.O

re-uploaded 13:30, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? 11:48, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Stoneteller (OTS) (Ki) - For Approval
All colors are pulled from the cave-guard image since I still somehow have that file. o.O

can u define the shading on the left foreleg 01:33, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Heathertail (Ki) ~ For Approval
This took aaaaaaaaagggggeeeesssssss. And it's so tiny >< Main pelt colour and tabby colour from warrior but everything else is from apprentice. --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:51, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading overall haha I wanted this. But you had done a better job with her than I would ever have had ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:43, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:49, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Wow those stripes are fantastic. Could you darken the shading because I can barely see it. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   14:13, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload thanyou! --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:07, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Star) - For Approval
Dun, dun. What a beauty! (I can't do stripes). — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:31, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

How did you do that O.O anyways, as for this beautiful image, could you define the light on ==> that leg? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:29, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:31, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded — Darken stripes and added some light to her right foreleg. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   19:35, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten your shading a bit, it's kind of clashing with the colors. 15:11, December 30, 2014 (UTC)