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Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
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Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

re-up  r ♥   ' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through ' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:12, 6/07/2019> ​

This might sound a bit weird, but can you lessen the shading a touch inside the ear? Cats' ears can be on the translucent side so I don't think the shadows would be quite that dark 04:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-up nah you're good  r ♥   ' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through ' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <15:58, 6/09/2019> ​

I think the haunch should show more of the stripes; the MC here does show some that aren't consistent with this placement of 'em. I know the queen came first, but there's also some parts that aren't visible on the queen that should be made to match the MC.

Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval


Smooth out the haunch shading a bit? 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

honestly it could be smoothed out everywhere

Could you curve the shoulder shading up onto the shoulder. Right now it seems like it stops abruptly there and kinda throws it off a bit.  Ellie  life is an illusion 01:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

re-up Mink, can you explain? I'm not quite sure of what you're saying. Its definitely 100% optional, but curving the shading to form along the shoulder, like at the very edge of it so it isn't straight and appears 3d instead of 2d  Ellie  life is an illusion 05:23, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading depth to the arm? And perhaps define the depth just a bit on the tail and by the chin/muzzle area. 01:59, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think I see a little leaking shading on the tail. By the way, you may wanna put your signature next to the image because it disappeared. 16:07, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

re-up i just put it there? wth?

I'm a little confused on the source...most of it seems to be saying the light is shining < way because of how the facial shading is placed, in which case I think a little shading on the < side of the haunch and a bit more shading to define the neck would likely be called for. Or, if it's the other way, then just the facial shading would be on the wrong side, to make the light go > way

re-up light source is from the top. i can always change it if need be.

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out  Ellie  life is an illusion 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out? 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out more. It's still very sharp, and the revision history shows only slight changes.

The design was supposed to be sharp, so I'm tryng to smoothbit as much as I can while kesping the shading design. But yeah, ill fix that  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:45, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think if you lighten it just a little more, you can remove some of the sharpness - but Spooky's comment still stands, its still sharp.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:41, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading leaking away from the lineart on the belly, underneath the tail, and on the > back leg. If could nab away waste floating about and add some light to the tail tip as well, that'd be great.

re-ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:30, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the back of the head/neck area? It looks rather blocky in comparison to the rest of the image.

Apple Blossom (W) ~ For Approval
okay thats enough cat doodles for tonight

01:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

The colors dont quite seem to match her others. The stripes should be sharper and the design should probably match the style thats going on there, she seems to have side stripes more so on her other side which should probably match this side too in style <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i think you should darken the shading a little :O 18:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Reuploaded

19:35, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

there's a line of waste underneath the tail and the back paw furthest from us doesn't seem to be filled in

Still working?

Reuploaded SCHOOL'S OUT!

00:23, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yay Ari!! Anyways, that back paw Moonyy mentioned doesn't appear to filled in. All I see is the background. 00:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded pftttt

00:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face around the muzzle 04:56, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There should be one more tail stripe. 20:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

23:09, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Nice job, Ari^^ Smooth the shading in -> ear, maybe even lighten it a little. The stripes appear softer on her other images, could you blur/smooth them some? And sharpen the white on the head, it looks a bit too soft there. Disconnect the ear and face white on <- side? I don't believe it's supposed to be connected there. 02:13, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Patch! =)

23:20, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

For lack of better words, I think the color of the stripes should be more defined. They seem defined in shape on the other images, almost as if paintbrush-drawn then blurred. I think the ones here might have smudged out the visibility a little bit. It still matches with Patch's comment in that these should be soft(er) than they had been, but they should still be as defined in color.

Reuploaded i tried

01:00, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg

Dewnose (W) - For Approval
My first charart ever lol. (Hand drawn shading, not texture) <span style="">15:29 Wed Jun 5

Could you add some shading to the hind paw? 15:37, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think there'd be a touch less white on the tail, basing off the apprentice

Could you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:27, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this tomorrow. I'm exhausted from work the past few days oof <span style="">22:25 Sat Jun 8

Reuploaded <span style="">14:19 Sun Jun 9

Could you perhaps even out the transition between the draw-on styled shading vs. to where it kinda becomes the typical blurred style? It's just right there where it switches over that looks a little off to me

Ambermoon (Alt K) - For Approval
love the new blanks. Very cute 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:17, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:48, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the tail from the haunch shading. 01:09, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  02:02, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading. 16:13, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define it some when you do expand it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:11, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's always shading... you'd think I'd know how to do it by now 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source- where is the light coming from? 19:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's coming from the left--where her face is. How would you emphasize that? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

With that, there shoud be no shading on the top of the tail. 22:52, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

To add to Potato's comment, to make it as coming to face, there wouldn't be any shading on the < side of the haunch either, the shading on the bottom of the tail would extend to the tailtip, there'd be more on the > side of the arm, and some extending to the chin.

Reuploaded Completely redid shading. With my luck, probably made it worse, but, whatever 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Switch your haunch shading to the other side. 20:14, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needn’t go so high up the backbone. Also - the haunch is unshaded. Should be some to form the shape of the bum; kinda how it is on some of the other images around.

The shading needs expanded quite a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:28, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Appledawn (W) ~ For Approval
It's the only one of the set, so there's nothing I have to be matching, right? I also don't know if I'm happy with the eyes or texture... 00:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

We recently agreed to match the old images, so this would have to match the old warrior. But I think the colors match close enough with the exception of the eye color and ear pink...the stripes should be curlier. 01:04, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading and shading depth?

Define the light and the pupil in the eye 02:22, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be a bit thicker. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:39, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, that was painful. Am I allowed to keep the texture? I don't think the old one had any... 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It did not have texture, as far as I'm aware.

Do I have to remove it, then? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It does have to match the old image, so yeah

Reuploaded Well, that's annoying that I wasted so much time w/ the texture, but at least it's easy to undo 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, and expand it on the back?

Reuploaded One of these days I'll know how to do shading... 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Practice makes perfect! With this source, there would not be shading on  >> that side of the haunch. There would also be shading on the top of the most visible hind leg, and the bottom tail shading where the tail touches the ground would be on the top part, not the bottom. 04:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading from the flank leaking onto the top of the haunch. Could you add depth to the hind leg and foot, along with the front legs? Perhaps expand the shading on the front leg and connect it to the shoulder too? If you're trying to match the original image, I think the stripes could stand to be a bit more... wavy? I'm not sure what word to use to describe it. The earpink in <- ear looks a little duller than what you have in the other, it looks a little off. This image is turning out great! 18:25, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (W) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Hate to be that person, but would she get a warrior image? 00:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think she would, as she was a Early Settler, then medicine cat. 00:44, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think this is actually a mistake from Secrets of the Clans. To my knowledge, I think she was called a warrior at first. It would be a mistake.

I just had a look through my copy, and I couldn't find anything that directly stated she was a warrior - or what rank she was prior to her medicine cat appointment.

Dusk Nose (Ki) - For Approval
- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:35, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

you need the file? also, could you smooth out the shading?

I think the patches are...streakier? Have more streaks in them? 00:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't think I need the file? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

The black patch on the head should be covered in ginger. On the hunter it's covered in shading

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I meant the area behind the ear. sorry for being unclear

The paws are also gonna have to be cream according to the tweak page. 17:41, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:13, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) ~ For Approval
like this one so much more than the old one :p

00:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading lines to smooth out the transition on the shoulder shading? The very top. And some more on the haunch and tail shading, too, while you're at it. 03:20, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading.

00:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading just at where the tail bends in the middle, and define it on the < ear?

Reuploaded Tried my best with smoothing it

17:53, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

I think this could be smoothed a lot more, its still super rough. You could try transitioning it so it fades into the fur as the way it is now makes it look very abrupt. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Cherrytail (W) ~ For Approval
wad made to match the old warrior since that is first in the set, also match to the apprentice. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading depth on the back paw closest to us; the shading looks darker than the rest of the image. Also, define tail shading near the base of it.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:31, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white paws, some

Leaking shading on the white paw closest to us, and could you smudge out the ginger patch right underneath her ---> eye? 20:13, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I don’t think changes are showing, Mink. I can’t see a difference between the uploads, can reupload again or show the changes elsewhere?

Comparing to the other images, the ginger needs to be a tad more orangish. This looks yellow. 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked from the file I had as well as the warrior and since the warrior came first that's the one I need to match as well as the apprentice. Especially considering most of images don't matches colorwise or patternwise I think I'll leave it to match the warrior and apprentice. Also, I'll upload on the changes soon <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:23, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnbright (W) ~ For Approval
There was an attempt made.. if I'm not allowed to keep the textured shading i can remove it! 13:14, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Its definitely allowed, could you darken it actually <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

should have "for approval", added it for you.

14:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you brighten up the white? If you're matching the old images (which as OA of the set, I'd like that), I used pure white for it.

The shading depth can also be defined as well. 17:58, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

yikes my memory is concerning Re-Uploaded! 19:38, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes just a bit on the head? 20:08, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 19:59, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define shading depth on the tail white? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:22, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 22:13, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnbright (K) ~ For Approval
she 13:14, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Same as warrior <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

what i said on the warrior.

14:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Same as warrior; brighten up the white.

Re-Uploaded! Is this better? I kinda overworked it.. 19:45, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

could u define the shading a bit? i know this might mess the white but i can barely see it.

02:32, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 19:56, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail tip <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:21, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 22:12, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Milkfur (MV) (W) - CBA
what the heck was my middle school self thinking???? 14:29, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste under the tail, and there seems to be many uncolored/unshaded pixels on said tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:27, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

reup 03:23, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Berrynose (Ki) - CBA
Hmm... I have regrets. Tried to match the apprentice images. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing until the image number is lowered. 16:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

There is enough room now for this image. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Un-withdrawn due to space. 18:50, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Base needs to lighter to match the other images in the set. 19:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is called Juni colorpicks from the wrong place on the image. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think the texture should be softer

Reuploaded. 01:15, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lessen how high the shading goes on the haunch just a little

do you want the file? also, the texture has more shape to it rather than just being lines 12:54, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

The file would be greatly appreciated. My email is mello.roxas13@gmail.com 15:25, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the texture for now, and also fixed haunch shading. Will probably mess with it more once I have the file. 15:49, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried. 22:47, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

the fur should look shorter, and the highlights should also be defined on the texture 03:24, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hopefully this is getting better and not worse. 14:02, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? You did a stellar job matching the texture. 00:01, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Darktail (Ki) - CBA
He looks far too cute to be Darktail tbh. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:32, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing for same reasons as Berrynose's kit. 16:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)  The page is currently at 60, so I believe this is allowed now? If so, un-withdrawing. 18:49, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the white? 20:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

The black should be sharper on the booty <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:07, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you sharpen the patch on the eye? This is adorable! 02:30, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Still too cute to be Darktail imo. 15:29, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you reduce the shading just a smidge on the haunch, and add a little shading on the > side of the front arm that shows? (kinda where it meets to a T with the tail, forming an elbow of sorts)

Reuploaded. 22:47, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some shading on the shoulder in the area between the head and haunch? Images like Beetlenose, Primrosepaw, Wavepaw, and Dusk Nose have similar sources and have what I'm talking about. 01:38, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:00, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Break up that larger black patch that's hanging above the haunch a little bit, and I think the black patch farthest << way would need to be removed, since it's close to hanging above the arm, and the other images don't have any there

Reuploaded. Like this? 15:30, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Yup. CBA?

Crouchfoot (Alt. W) - CBA
And Crouchfoot makes three. 16:25, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I hate to be that person but only 60 images are allowed on the approval page until the CBAs are archived. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Withdrawing for the same reasons as Berrynose's and Darktail's kit images. 16:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC) The page is currently at 60, so I believe this is allowed now? If so, un-withdrawing. 18:48, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I think it's fine. I'm having a hard time distinguishing the base from the lineart. Is there any way you can lighten the base? 20:38, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm just bad at colorpicking today it seems. 23:55, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe lighten a little more. I still can't see anything rip

Reuploaded. 22:47, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Dawncloud (W) ~ CBA
Changed the colors to match the others -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:45, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad softer. 21:03, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe curve that stomach shading just a little more? It looks a little hard-edged, but, that might be because of its placement on a stripe too?

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:17, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:43, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) ~ Declined
All colors from mc/rogue images. 00:41, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

This might be the same case as Dappledpelt, but, was he directly called a warrior in one of the field guides?

Not sure on the other, but I did check up on this one and found it wasn't in use prior to us removing for the redoes, and there isn't an accompanying cite as the original one was an assumption altogether. Must've been mistakenly added to the to-do, so I'll go ahead and decline this.

Nectarsong (K) ~ For Approval
OA claim given to me by patch :)

01:51, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the foreleg shading a bit? 02:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups

02:20, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

could you possibly darken/define the texture just a smidge? 14:21, June 9, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reups

12:52, June 10, 2019 (UTC) reups oops. looked the same

12:54, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the texture just a bit more? Maybe adding some more on another layer could also help. 17:44, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oddfoot (K) - CBA
warrior isn't in use so new pattern kids

didnt we agree that unless you're the oa, you have to match the pattern in the set, even if its not in use? (which was the entire outcome of the shade pelt drama) 12:53, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Max is the OA, they said earlier that they are the OA especially since the warrior isn't in use. So this is fine imo. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

but hes not the OA of the warrior, is he? 15:11, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Checked, and the OA of the warrior is Paleclaw. 15:24, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think the difference here is it isn't 'not-in-use' in the way that's 'we removed all the kits and warriors to re-add them to pages' but rather the 'not-in-use' in that Oddfoot's warrior is an invalid cite with an image that was just kept of courtesy. It's not going to be redone into the set like Shade Pelt's needed to be, and this is a single by count. And since it's an OA single, I personally think they can do whatever.

The warrior isn't in use due to an invalid cite, meaning Max is free to do whatever they want with the pattern. There was no proof that Oddfoot was a warrior, which is why the cite was removed.

Isn't his name proof in itself though? As we all know only warriors/meds get unique suffixes so it wouldn't make sense for him not to be a warrior. He should at least get an unknown residence blank (could they be used for instances like this? Maybe a new blank should be made for situations like this) since he most likely was not a kit. But besides that, can you make the base color a tad more brown? It looks gray to me, while the stripes look (very dark) brown. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:12, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

The name is only proof he was at least an adult cat, but we don't know if he was a warrior.. it's likely that he was, given that Nightmask was the deputy at the time, but there's still nothing outright calling him a warrior. Regardless, that discussion is for PC and this should only focus on the art, not whether or not a cite is valid.

reuploaded

CBA?

Night (HJ) (Ki) - For Approval
Oreo cat returns, and yes the shading is tinted purple.

Could you define the shading some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:05, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Where? Because I can see it pretty clearly pretty much everywhere. o.O

i can also see the shading everywhere, but maybe dull the tint down slightly so that it doesnt clash with the colors as much? 03:25, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Honestly, it's not clashy enough that it disrupts the colours presented, so I think the tint is fine as is. It's clear there's shading and that's what counts.

I do think some depth might assist^^ I can definitely see it's shape, but on the haunch in particular it comes off flat

Rushtooth (W) - For Approval
Everything from the DF, including shading layers/opacity. <span style="">14:24 Sun Jun 9

the stripes look thing on the others, could you possibly thin them out some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is over the page limit of 60 images. 15:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Never mind, some images were archived. 15:29, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading a bit. 20:10, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste trapped between the < front paw and the back paw

Sandstorm (Alt W 3) - For Approval
It is the only one for this description, so I can change the pattern, since it was also my original image. I prefer this one lol <span style="">14:24 Sun Jun 9

Same as Rushtooth, this is over the page limit. 15:02, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Read above ^^  15:30, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the face just a smidge?

Honey Pelt (W) ~ CBA


CBA? 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Flowerstem (AVoS) (W) ~ CBA


CBA? 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Wavepaw (K) ~ For Approval


Could you smooth out the tail shading?

Reuploaded

Could you define the depth a tad on the head and foreleg shading? 17:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Bouncefire (W) ~ CBA
this was fun 17:06, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe add a touch of shading underneath the chin?

Reups Not sure why I'm struggling with the shading so much. 16:37, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Patch Pelt (Ki) - For Approval
Any advice on how to shade this would be appreciated. The colors are straight from the file for Milkweed's queen, which I got from Jayie. I wanted to try and make him match his mother in coloring. I'm thinking of going and adding a little more black to him...

Re-uploaded. I could not get that to work, so I did a few things.

I'm afraid I still can't see it very well, though I've checked on a few. Might I suggest a very dark purple on a high opacity?

Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 19:44, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit and maybe lighten it some. 20:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:43, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading so it goes more in the way the fur would run? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:18, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Beetlenose (K) - CBA
colourpicked from the warrior

CBA?

Fernsong (Ki) ~ For Approval
oa claim that spooky gave to me. this was a hard pattern though :(

23:24, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading just a tiny bit on the top of the haunch? He is babey... 23:27, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

There should be paler streaks right above the eyes, paler parts sweeping up along the haunch lineart, and paler front paws. And the stripes appear more...scratchy? Not at smooth and uniform. I'm sorry that I'm bad with words. >.< 01:32, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

This looks a bit darker than his other images? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:43, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I colorpicked directly from his apprentice image. 11:31, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Cora (W) - For Approval
Same source as Cloversplash. Comments? 01:05, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! I forgot her bitten ear, I'll add that in a moment. 01:06, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:20, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I know you're using clover's source but the shading could be smoothed a bit more.

12:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

honestly, it could be smoothed a lot. its too hard edged <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:27, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:51, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again tweaked things about the ears. 17:59, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt. Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? 01:44, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading just a bit? 02:08, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:12, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the uanch shading? 03:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Petaldust (W) ~ For Approval
02:08, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the ginger. Her old ones seemed to show more ginger iirc <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Hopefully the changes show. 16:38, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Petaldust (K) ~ For Approval
02:08, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

^per the warrior <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 16:38, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Star Flower (W) ~ For Approval


For lack of better words, I don't think all the stripes should start at the dorsal stripe and go all the way across. The other images showing this side show at least a little of the stripes ending before they reach over, and some stripes not connecting to the back, making them less uniform

The stripes are also more scraggly and rugged on the other images. Could you define the texture, also? Seems more visible on the other images. 17:50, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I smudged the stripes across to increase the visibility of the texture but I got the opacities and layers from the original rogue, so I don't think I'll increase the opacity of the actual texture layer.

Sparkpelt (K) - For Approval
idk how i matched this back in the day wtf 04:42, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the forearm and the shoulder/haunch area?

reup 06:50, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Quick Water (W) ~ For Approval


Define the chest shading on the white.

Could you possibly define the white on the legs, they look gray? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:45, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Smudge out the white haunch some more? There is also waste above the ---> ear and a triangle piece on the left side of the tail. 17:53, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Millie (Alt. W) - For Approval
the original was the first in this set; matched the side to loner which was the second in the set.

Could you add some light to the stomach below the shoulder? there should be a little light there with the source <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:29, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, I don’t quite understand what you mean by that Mink? Could you elaborate or redline? I will be playing with the overall darkness though because I’m not happy with it

The stomach, its completely covered in shading, there should be some light on the bottom of it at least. I can provide a redline when im on my laptop <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:16, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

This is the same source I’ve used on Quailheart, I’d like a second opinion if that’s alright. Again, I’m still gonna tweak the darkness, because there is some light on the stomach area.

If this source is used on Quailheart, it's fine. I agree with Max. 22:52, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarheart (W) - For Approval


05:56, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading and lessen it onnthe shoulder and stomach? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:12, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking on the lower chest and it could stand to be darkened a little more. 17:56, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Lizardstripe (W) ~ For approval
i'll lighten the stripes more later 07:42, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (Alt. K) - for approval
jesus dont look at the file history weird things happened

13:07, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I know there's only like, 3 or 4 pixels, but is there some way you can define the eye depth a bit more? 00:04, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Clawface (K) - For approval
danger boy 14:18, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Brightsky (W) - For Approval
The shading's pretty icky, I'll probably change it. 14:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The ears are a tad flat, perhaps define the shading on them? 14:31, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:50, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The ears should be white with a little bit of ginger on the tips 18:00, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  22:24, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Stoatfur (BS) (W) - For Approval
The first image I ever did. Honestly, don't know how I got the original to look like it does. 14:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Sharpened the stripes. 22:27, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (W) - For Approval
17:41, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

This is the old one, are the changes showing? 17:41, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The changes are showing now. Good work on one of the trickiest patterns! There needs to be a lot more flecks and the brown is lighter. 17:45, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:55, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Would you like one of the files? I think I still have Jayce's old warrior and I have the hunter if you want them. They might help technicality wise. 18:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the brown, all im seeing is gray <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:48, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i think i'm alright vec but thank you ^^ and i've tried brightening the brown, there's not much i can do without making it look way off color 23:05, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Brackenfoot (W) - For Approval
17:43, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Black Ear (W) - For Approval
this is a god tier design 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The patches need to be more sharply smudged. 17:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded not quite sure what you meant by this but i tried?? lol 17:57, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the light in the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:48, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Thriftpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
19:02, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Mind defining the shading a bit? It blends in with the color of her pelt and the texture and it's kind of hard to see. 19:29, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's no texture; that's the shading. 19:33, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

It does look like the whole hody is covered in texture, if thats shading can that be receded if the others don't have texture? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:14, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:21, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Bloomheart (W) - For Approval
00:26, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Where is the image? I don't see it. 00:33, June 11, 2019 (UTC)


 * in the process of fixing it 00:34, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Barley (Ki) - For Approval
I think I can do this, Branchwing doesn't do chararts anymore to my knowledge. Also thanks for using my charart in an award, I'm honored ^^. Hopefully I can get it. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:37, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Russetfur (W) - For Approval
her tabby pattern looked better on the rogue... 01:45, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Dawnflower (K) - For Approval
We're back, baby. I changed a few things, including the shading and adding the small gap in the haunch that I forgot before. I'll upload her warrior tommorow. Comments? 02:04, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, especially around the cheek bone and smudge/blur the earpink into a pelt some so it's not such a perfect straight line 02:21, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Bramblestar (W) - For Approval
Another broad-shouldered dark brown tabby tom in the books. But he's the nice one :) Hopefully I gave Icy's Bramblestar some justice. 02:05, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (W) - For Approval
02:16, June 11, 2019 (UTC) The freckles need to be one color- there's no mention of different colored flecks and she currently looks like a tortie. 03:10, June 11, 2019 (UTC)