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Brackenfur (W) ~ Redone
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar. 05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D 19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should be shorter; it doesn't go all the way to his underarm. It's just on his flank. 20:50, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? 00:41, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Possibly thicken the stripes a bit? 01:14 Sat Feb 4

Make the earpink a bit bigger too. 01:18 Sat Feb 4

Make the scar a bit thicker. 03:55, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, i think the ear-pink is fine and for the stripes, they are the same thickness as the other ones. Other then that, comments? 18:27, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please make the earpink a bit bigger and define it? Also move it into the ear more. 19:13 Sun Feb 5

Blur the shading too. 23:34 Sun Feb 5

The stripes may be the same thickness as his kit charart, but this isn't a kit. As he grew, his stripes naturally grew as well to be proportional to his body size. On that note, the apprentice charart should be tweaked as well. 04:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading looks... odd, i'm trying to fix that, don't worry. 21:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That's because it's dark. Lighten it, pleeease. :P 21:20, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stupid shading Why must it be so irritating? Comments? 21:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading a little more. And where is the light source? I can't find one. 22:46, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 00:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten or blur the shading, and define the earpink. Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes and change the color of the scar to something a bit more different from the stripes, I almost told you to get rid of the extra ginger stripe on the flank. XD 15:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes some more. 22:50, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

... Okay, I'm sorry, but this just doesn't feel like Brackenfur. Can we do an overhaul on the image and make it a redo?-- 23:55, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (L) ~ Tweaked
The OA was some user named *Wildfire* :P shading needed to be tweaked. 16:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oh yeah, whoever is that user. XP Naw. This looks nice. Could you perhaps darken the shading a tad? But, if it's fine, that's alright. ;) 16:50, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:24, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. Nice.05:22, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Still working on this, Wild? 17:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yes -- 01:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the eye depth please? 09:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:35, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandy with a very slight tweak by Icey. I had permission to redo this, as the shading needed to be darkened, wrong shading placement, and the colors were wrong, along with some blurred lineart. I was told to keep the same style. Comments? 20:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is really good. Blur/smudge the stripes on the chest area a tad bit. 166.249.107.125 20:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

^that was me^. Forgot to sign in. 20:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Like this? ^^ Hope changes are showing... 20:23, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make him less greenish and more brown. 23:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. :D 23:33 Sun Feb 5

Could you tweak the stripe on his face? It looks more like a tattoo (you know, one of those tattoos from Yu-Gi-Oh that all the badies seem to have) than a stripe. 04:14, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I want only ask.. because this is beatiful, are we going to redone his apprentice charart too? (oh bad question) and may I do it, since Im OA? 17:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, go for it. 17:35, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely Wifband <333 Define the tail shading a bit. 00:25, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the legs, makes it look like they're darker, like Brackenfoot. Sky Fus Roh Dah  09:55, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 03:36, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Still, make him more brown. 18:10, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried fiddling around with him... -- 01:20, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (D) ~ Redone
Had permission to redo. Reason was: Blotchy highlights, earpink, and a triangle tabby. I don't know who the OA was, as Oblivion renamed the file. Comments? 03:23, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely job dear! ^^ Make the eaprink stand out a bit more. 09:06, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more triangular too. 23:08 Fri Feb 10

Reuploaded. The earpink was already triangular, but it wasn't defined enough to show the shape. x3 09:06, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (W) - Redone
OA was Bramble with a tweak by Mint and Icy, I think. Stripes had to be redone and it was in the redo section. Comments? 03:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some. Sky Fus Roh Dah 04:17, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The apprentice's stripes were redone, so could you match that image? This is lovely. :) 08:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't really like the way I made the apprentice. I would love you if you redid the apprentice too because this is lovely. Darken the earpink a bit ^^ 15:31, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Mountain Sure thing! To be honest, I totally forgot that she was seen as an apprentice. 04:49, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Sky To Kill An Empire 22:56, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:23, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Round the shading on the shoulder a little. Breeze whisker  00:47, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less bubble gum pink, and more flesh colored. And it might just be my computer screen, as it tends to throw colors off a bit, but she looks a tad green. 11:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I think that might be your computer screen, it looks fine to me, but then again, I have bad eyesight (no joke). 22:20, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon. 09:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:16, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Dustpelt (W) - Redone
Original artist was Bramble, with an eye tweak from Nightshine, a redo from Cloudskye, and a small eye depth tweak from Icestorm that was reverted. Comments? 20:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

LOL. My horrible stripes have finally been redone! Thank you, Moon. This looks much better. Define the ear pink a tad. 20:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded No problem. 21:01, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks awesome O8 blur or smudge the paler belly 22:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the tail. Sky To kill an Empire... 23:05, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:47, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make his stripes a tad bigger? He looks a bit mottled. 11:51, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't look mottled to me. 17:55, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

He looks oddly flat. Define the shading and highlights, and maybe darken/intensify them. Breeze whisker  00:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll get rid of the waste at the next reupload. 02:39, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

...or get rid of it now? What's the point in reuploading it when it's not completely finished? 02:47 Fri Feb 10

...then just critique it, I'll be reuploading it? 02:54, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Well that's the thing. It's perfect as it is. The only issue is the waste. So... 03:02 Fri Feb 10

I'll comment if you want. Define the earpink on the cat's right side (on the left ear, right side of the earpink). Feel free to disagree. <span style="">05:21, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Reuploaded 18:07, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on all ze legs and possibly make him a little less red. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  00:05, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Frecklewish (MCA) - Redone
I hate to see this one redone, but it's a triangle tabby, so... :P OA was the lovely Oblivion. Comments? 12:34, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define thear ear pink on ---> side. Lovely :3  13:15, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

-cries- Y u redo my image :'c Just kidding, it's better than before ^^ Her eyes should be a darker green; they look kind of yellow right now. 03:39, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Well she doesn't actually have a cited eye color Oblivion, so if it's Ok, I'm gonna keep it like this. xD 04:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W) ~ Tweaked
I feel I should do more tweaks -_- Anyway, It needed a bushy tail. It was on the list. OA was Bramble and was tweaked/redone by a lot of people. Comments? 14:50, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the tail more squirrel-like by any chance? o3o Lovely. ^^ 16:10, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oi. Lineart fail. Is this better? 01:43, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Not sure if the changes are showing or not, but it still doesn't look very squirrel-like. Maybe make it a bit more like the leader's tails? Not so spiky, but still fluffy. 11:44, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Eh, too fluffy? 22:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Highlights needed to be blurred, but I re-did the shading. OA was Mousetalon with a redo by Oblivion and tweaks by Paleh, Scarlet and Icestorm. 21:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Waste inbetween the legs, m'dear, Fire. 21:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

XD That always happens. Re-Uploaded. 21:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">01:55 Sat Feb 11

Re-Uploaded. 15:03, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Mossheart (SC) (MC) ~ Redone
OAs were Echomist and Scarletwind. The shading needed to be redone and the highlights were too bright. Since the patten was difficult it was labled as redo. To you two, I am sorry for ruining this D: 22:01, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste by the tail, and the smudges aren't following the direction the fur should go. 22:29, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:52, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed heading :D. Make the earpink bigger and blur it. <span style="">23:04 Fri Feb 10

Hmm...I know the original file is named this, but, you should rename is File:Mossheart (SC).mc.png because of the charart template and it's the proper page name. This looks lovely, Silver. 23:11, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still named improperly. :P File:Mossheart (SC).png :P 03:03, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make her short-furred? It says that she didn't envy Quailfeather(?)'s thick,long fur, suggesting she has short fur. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, I can't put parentheses around the file name, my computer is a butthead and won't allow it. Maple, I'm going to wait for a second opinion on that. She could be envy of Quailfeather and still have long haired. 12:35, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Would you like me to rename it after it's approved? This needs to conform with the naming policy for images. Also, I think she should be shorthaired as well; what Maple said makes sense. 02:27, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

That would be great, thanks oblivion ^^. I'll get to editing soon for this. 17:03, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Q) - Tweaked
I tweaked the color shade to make it darker. Original Artist is Mumble I think, with a minor tweak by Ivy and a tweak/redo by Paleh. What do you think? <span style="">23:12, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Purdy <3 Lighten the shading a tad. 23:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great and all, but why'd it need to be darkened? She looked dark gray before, and she's not meant to be black.... 04:30, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Because the rogue and loner images didn't match. I added it to the tweak list. Check 'em out yourself. 04:37, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

EDIT: if anything, now it's too dark. Try taking the dodge tool over it once at about...20 %. 04:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Ah, tweaking. =D Anyway, it was on the list for shading, so, I just layered some shading overtop of the image, not major or anything. Okay, I think the OA was Snowfeather1 with some help along the way from Night shine. Comments? 02:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and blur them 03:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC)- Tweaked


I think I died while making him....I swear I did....Anyway, had blurred lineart shading was blotchy, needing a crusty/runny nose, and patchy fur, OC was Dawnfeather, With a Tweak from Ivyheart. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a missing patch of fur on his shoulder? And blur the earpink a little. 16:31, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, I tried to copy the patchy fur from his elder... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 00:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

But, the linearts are facing opposite directions, Maple. Give it a shot and see what it looks like. 05:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Snowtuft (W) - Tweaked
OA was Insaneular with a redo by Mintstarr. The scar needed to be more realistic. I tried something new with this, tell me if it works or not :P 04:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar a bit paler; it looks a bit too bright/maybe redden it 04:47, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Briarlight (W) ~ Redone
Yes, I did ask before re-doing an image such as this. Now, I took the color from the alt, not the normal apprentice. I like the shade of brown used. OA was Fawnstorm, and the brown didn't match any of her images, the highlights needed dulled and the shading defined. Just throwing tons of chararts out recently...xD 06:34, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the haunch and rump shading. 09:08, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hehe, rump. x3 Brighten the haunch lightness a tad. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  18:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for Stone's request. I'll do yours in a sec, Trolly. 18:16, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for Trolly. 18:20, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make her forelegs a bit thinner. They're kinda chubby right now c: 06:00, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Umm.... I have no clue how to tweak the lineart. I'll end up killing it or something. XDDD 06:01, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (A) ~ Tweaked
Paleclaw informed me that this needed some tweaking. I'm the OA of the previous version of the image. It needed to be dark brown and have the shading tweaked. Comments? 15:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D) ~ Redone
Yep, was redone to match the elder. I got permission. OA was Iceflower, Mossleap, and myself. Comments? 16:29, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define tail shading naaaaaow. :3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 18:05, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Eh heh *does it several hours later* X3 18:49, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (A) - Redone
Got permission from Mounty to redo her to match her warrior. OA was Goldenpaw and then redone by Mounty with the new lineart. Comments? 02:18, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the "highlight" on the flank. Lovely as always, Scarlet. 06:50, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (W) - Redone
OA was Shimmerpool with a tweak by Stoneclaw. She needed to match her prey hunter. I rather like this one :D Comments? 05:17, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and define the lighter part of the tail. :3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 05:42, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Loonie, can you define the ear pink a tad? 05:45, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -eye twitch- 05:47, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes or connect some more, and define the depth in the eye. Lovely! 06:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)