Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Rowanfur~Silver nomination
Excuse me. I may be somehow doing this wrong. xD I'm nominating him because his page isn't a stub and it seems all the info that can be added on him is added. I cna't find any good quotes for him, but his main quote looks good. . 01:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Bahaha your not doing it wrong ;) Can you expand SkyClan's Destiny at all?   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 22:58, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see if i can. :) . 22:59, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C} 23:09, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I've fixed some sentences and at elast attemped to expand, but there isn't much to expand, he doesn't appear very often. :3 . 23:10, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

That's better ;)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C} 23:42, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Can you find one or two more quotes? 19:28, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I looked through the pages where he talk and appears, but nothing is good enough for a quote. Unless, "Of course." Is a good quote. O.o. 22:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the quotes don't have to be spoken by him. They can always be from a narrator or a dialogue quote. The transitions between paragraphs, like "He is not seen for a while" or "he first appears". Could you possibly rephrase those sentences so you don't include those words? If not, it's fine. Nice work! 00:40, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Other than that it looks a lot better than when you started! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 23:03, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks guys! And I've fixed everything you stated, Atelda. . 23:36, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome, I think there's basically nothing wrong with it. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C 23:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

You should fix this sentence: "He comes back to camp with eight other warriors, he is injured shredded ears."

Can you re-word the second paragraph of SkyClan's Destiny? 04:57, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I believe it's been three weeks without a comment. Is it possible for me to take over? 04:54, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, no. I was fixing them, I just wasn't posting that I fixed it by accident. x.x. 07:11, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thats okay XD. I'll leave the nomination to you for now. 05:39, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Molepaw ~Silver Nomination
Anybody know some places he appears? I looked int he books he was in, but I dont know the page numbers, so I cant look into great detail at the moment. Also, if I knew there might be a chance I can add a quote or two. Other than that, his page looks good. . 00:10, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you really elaborate on when it's said "he makes minor appearences"? Or possibly add more detail and rephrase the sentence to avoid those phrases^. Awesome so far! 00:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add a few quotes (including a main one). 21:30, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Arg. *Facepalm* :3 Did you read my paragrpah up there? I quote: "I dont know the page numbers, so I cant look into great detail at the moment. Also, if I knew there might be a chance I can add a quote or two." I don't know so i can't at the moment. . 22:27, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, maybe you can detail it with words, instead of stuff used exactly in the book. Like changing the words around, thus expanding the sentence. S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 22:43, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I tried doing that once or twice, but users kept reverting it. . 22:48, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, well it was worth a try. Maybe they think it was unnessicary, which means you might as well wait to get the book(s) before you expand or detail it. So that your not wasting your time adding and undoing what they are doing. Thanks, for trying! S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 22:58, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I have the books, I have the whole series, in fact. -- I just don't know the pages where Molekit/paw is exacily mentioned. :3 . 23:17, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, silly me :3. Maybe you could skim through the book? S w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! {C {C} 23:27, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I've already tried that, but if he appears minorly, I doubt i'd be able to spot it. :S. 23:35, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, true, we'll maybe when your not busy, you could re-read the whole book :P So you can find it :)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 23:41, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Is it absoulutly nessecary? O.o I'm already reading about six books. xD. 05:45, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, it's not, but I just thought if you had free time on your hands you could ;)   S  w  e  e  t  f  l  o  w  e  r    Calling all the monsters! 17:49, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken out Fading Echoes some, possibly add in more details to the minor appearance. 04:14, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is the style template ment to be there when you're nominating it? DJCandyBud 08:37, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

In the Fading Echoes section, it says, "...about what they argued about." Take out the first "about", and maybe un-italicize the "what". Hollydapple798 Happy Halloween! 15:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The style template is only a guideline telling the reader or such that this article needs work. Once voted and if made silver, then I'll delete it. 15:55, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, just confused. DJCandyBud 03:39, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

I believe it's been 3 weeks without a comment from the nominator. 04:59, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed what they told me to do, about three weeks ago. xD. 07:12, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

XD, Well just make sure you say when you fix something. 05:44, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail ~ Silver Nomination
I've been working on this for a while I guess. Comments? 23:27, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you re-write these direct quotes because your supposed to avoid direct quotes: "brave Rosetail, and that their kits were safe thanks to Yellowfang." (In the Into The Wild section) and "Poppydawn! No! Don't leave me!" (In Cats of the Clan section) 23:34, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Expand BP please. 02:15, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Done, I also realised I forgot the main quote, so I added that in. 03:51, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, it looks great! :D 03:55, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks XD! 07:41, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Secrets of the Clans please. 18:16, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded Secrets of the Clans. 05:44, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Put what codes she was mentioned in, it doesn't say in the Code of the Clans section. 17:21, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the Code of the Clans section flow a bit more? Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:01, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Could Bluestar's Prophecy be elaborated a little bit? I see quite a few one sentence/two sentence paragraphs. If not, I understand - it's not possible. xD 17:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Done, and Cloudy, I understand where you're coming from. I tried to make sure every paragraph had at least three sentences in them, but if something doesn't make sence, just point it out. ;) 02:51, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful job, OwlXGlitter4EVER. The article looks wonderful. 05:06, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you find a better main quote? 23:57, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Do you want me to use a quote from the quotes section? Or a new one? 05:06, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

A new one if you can find a new one. But if you can't, just pick one from the quote section. 23:56, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Greenflower ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded her history and added all of the quotes relevant to her. Comments? 10:04, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed a few mistakes. Looks great though! 11:26, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I added a couple links. Other then that minor issue, this looks excellent for such a minor character. Job well done, Speckle. 15:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Should the "c" in "half-clan" be capitalized in the second paragraph? Otherwise, looks nice!

Done 16:08, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Deatil her appearance if you can't expand her appearance. 23:52, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think II can add anymore to her history without making it repetitive. 23:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Pip ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded the history and added in the history for the allegiance-only books. 22:45, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Is the information on him barking at cats and chasing them necessary to put in the introduction? DJCandyBud 08:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any narrator quotes you could use? 13:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Instead of saying, "There have also been mentions of a dog chasing cats in the other books, which most likely was him," in the Dark River section, do you think you could make a trivia section, and add that in there? That way the Dark River section would be more relevant to his appearance in DR. Hollydapple798 Happy Halloween! 15:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the trivia thing, but narrator quotes about him don't really describe his personality... 16:21, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful job, Mistystar139. The article looks wonderful. 05:10, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBV list, lack of sleep. 23:07, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded the history a lot. Comments? 22:57, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Expand CP if you can please. 00:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I already did...I don't have the book right now. 00:30, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have a better quote for a main quote? 04:08, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, but I'll try to find one. 16:27, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think his quote should be from when he leaves ThunderClan. Not necessarily the one on his page now, but I think he says some pretty quote worthy things there. I can find another if you need help. =) 17:13, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Good idea. Can you? :3 17:26, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Better? I also added the quote from Lionpaw, because I really feel that describes Pinestar well. 17:41, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! You seem to have every single book in the series. :3 23:59, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I do, actually. I just don't care for some of the "manga"... The only four I don't have are the Tigerstar and Sasha trilogy and The Rise of Scourge. =P 16:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

CBV list..Sorry, suffering from lack of sleep. :P

Onestar - Silver Nomination
Only certain parts of the history needed to be expanded. Since it was the content drive, I fixed what was needed. DON'T tell me to expand Dawn, because I will hurt you. Comments? 23:39, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

His page is really good, expand Fire and Ice a bit. 15:42, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Outcast too please! 16:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

If possible could you expand Long Shadows and Sunset? 21:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I couldn't really expand POT, but I was able to expand Fire and Ice. 21:45, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a way you could expand Fading Echoes? Maybe he said something important when he was "unconvinced." But I'm not sure. 04:06, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the Cats of the Clans section? 17:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

The "c" in "a clan" in the second quote under the Quotes section should be capitalized, I think.

Clan isn't capitalized all of the time, believe it or not. Not sure why, but it happens quite a lot... 16:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's just a frequently-made typo. I know I forget to capitalize "Clan" a lot when I write fan fiction. Anyway, in the Firestar's Quest section, could you change the hyphen to a comma, and instead of saying "his territory" change it to "WindClan's territory"? 02:41, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all of the history. Comments? 00:02, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I forgot the quotes. I'm adding them in now. 00:03, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can you break up the first paragraph of Dark River if possible? 05:15, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've changes a few typos in Dark River and Long Shadows if anyone hadn't noticed them. xxx --CloudtailxBrightheart 09:40, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :3 I can't break up Dark River because the first paragraph is all from the prologue. 01:11, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Expand/Detail ''Long Shadows. ''22:27 Thu Nov 17

Done. 23:49, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Flora ~ Silver Nomination
Quotes are added, article's been expanded a bit, so comments? 02:30, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Expand SoTM? 12:16, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

That's all Flora appears in SoTM. 15:23, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Detail it then? 12:00, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

And add another quote if you can. 23:35, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can't add another quote, in fact, the last one was a push since it doesn't show Flora's personality as much as I would like. As for detail, I added about...I don't know, several words. :P 01:59, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Aha, better. 22:14, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lily ~ Silver Nomination
Her sister was nominated, and I think she's ready too! Comments? 12:12, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's a little redundancy with talking about how she's spoiled. Also, perhaps try not to make the article sound somewhat biased. :3 15:23, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Does she have a quote you can add in as her main quote? 14:36, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Done and I added a quote. 23:07, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Frosty ~ Silver Nomination
I haven't nominated anything for a long time, so I'm trying to get back in my nomination mood. So, comments? 12:12, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Is it possible for you to expand her breif history? If it's not, I understand. 14:35, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Detail it? 23:10, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I re-read Sunrise, and I don't think Frosty's page can be expanded, since Frosty is only mentioned once. 10:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you detail her appearance though? 22:21 Thu Nov 17

Snowtuft - Silver Nomination
First nomination here. I don't know if it's possible to add quotes, but if you want, I'll try. Comments? 01:55, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Suggestion: When someone edits an article, don't undo what they did. Usually, it makes the article better. Also, yes, there should be at least one quote. Find a narrator quote if he doesn't have any speaking parts. 01:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't know I undid the edit, I thought it was just some edit conflict by some random user. Sorry, i will look out for that in the future. Anyways, I'll try to find a quote. 02:23, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...the first section seems somewhat blunt. Fill that in and try to make it flow like the story. Otherwise, it looks great. 05:13, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done. I looked through the books to see when he was mentioned, and I added some quotes of the times he was mentioned. He isn't seen that often though, so it's kind of hard to add quotes on him. 06:13, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

The quotes are fine, but the last quote needs a description. 01:24, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Added a description for the last quote. 23:44, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart's Grandfather ~ Silver Nomination
He's a minor character, his history is about as detailed and expanded as possible, and there is a main quote. I'll continue to work on finding quotes, but otherwise... :3 05:13, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, this article is pretty good. I don't know if I can say anything, since you're looking for quotes. 06:15, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add in a few more details to the last part about what Mapleshade says about him, and add in the other quotes. Great work! 01:21, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Harrykit - Silver Nomination
Ok so this is my first nomanation so if this takes a long time..... well then i guess i fail XD anyways any comments? ♪ ★Hollycloud♪ ★ 17:18, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

His history could be a little more detailed. 20:37, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title. Expand The Rescue. 20:44, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well I couldnt find anything else unless I missed a few pages... I am known to do that well, appearntly to my english teacher... I a missed a few 5 pages on my book report XD ♪ ★Hollycloud♪ ★ 05:20, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add a quote. 00:49, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Stonepelt ~ Silver Nomination
Stonepelt has a good, large history for a minor character. Comments? 20:40, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Large history isn't everything ;) Expand SotC. 20:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't have SotC but I tried to expand as much as possible. 20:54, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I have the book, so I could if you wanted too. 21:00, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, sure. Thanks. 21:25, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome, I'll start now. 21:35, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 22:02, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think BP could use a little expanding. Also, try and make it flow better with sentences and paragraphs. Need help, just ask. =) 05:54, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Done that. 04:21, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work, but can you change the main quote to something that shows his personality more? The rest is great. 00:47, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Wondering
There are so many nominations, I was wondering if we should put up a limit on the page. Like PCA does. It makes the talk page less cluttered and easier to go through. I was just thinking. So, yeah. Thanks, 21:33, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

That might be a good idea. Or we could have a discussion page, where discussion comments go. 05:50, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I like the idea of a page limit. No offense, but it gives me a headache scrolling through all of the nominations. xD 05:52, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! Maybe the limit should be between 20 and 30? 06:04, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Between 20 and 30 would be good. I'd say no bigger than 30, because there is 30 sections now on the page, and some of it is discussion. Maybe 25? 06:18, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, people like me idea? That's a first xD 11:11, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

No, I'm sorry, but I don't think this is nessecary. It would put a limit on not only nominations but also discussions. We're not like PCA, and this would just lead into the solution of segregating the page. We don't have many discussions except for join requests, info that should/shouldn't be added, etc. Leads can always archive discussions/nominations faster as I'd be willing to do so. 13:53, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

A page limit is okay, but to find a nomination, we can always use the contents thing at the top. Like Atelda said, unlike PCA, we don't really have much clutter, and we don't usually get nominations declined. 23:00, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think we need a limit, it's fine how it is. However I'm not completely against the limit idea. 03:28, November 18, 2011 (UTC)