Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Braveheart (W) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstar12, redone with permission by Scarletwind; unrealistic tabby stripes. Comments? 00:13, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, and the stripes look painted on after the shading, could you darken the areas of the stripes in the shading? 01:07, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I did the stripes before the shading, but I defined the shading on them anyway. 01:11, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes to the legs? 02:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I like how you did this one ^^ Darken the shading a couple percent. 08:04 Wed Dec 21

Pretty ^^ Can you dull the earpink a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:44, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this, Misty? 19:17, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's been eight days. I'm pretty sure she's not working on this  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  18:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. Anyone who wants this can take over. 18:58, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I will. 21:31, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it fine that I re-did this again? And I'm back! 22:00, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the stripes and define the shading. Wb!

Reuploaded Heh, I had to use Pixlr. 00:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I love his pattern <3 03:24, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. Move the shading inward more. 05:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Didn't know how else to do it without ruining the image. 21:33, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and earpink, darken the shading, and try to make the stripes look more like stripes (ie not all the same width) and less like pencil-markings :P 01:21 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded Gross. 02:38, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

The tail stripes should match his body's. 00:04, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 17:29, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a little less purple-y. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  08:19, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look purple-y to me, it might be your monitor? 18:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

He does look kind of maroon-ish :3 Just desaturate him a little. 03:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:24, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Tweaked
My first tweak :3 OA was Icestorm123 and the shading needed to be blurred. 13:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I had reserved this, but I don't want to take away your glory ;3 I'll be happy to give it to you ;D Blur the shading a bit still. 05:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

facepalm* I'm sorry! Anyways, '''Re-Uploaded. ''' 14:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail tip. 14:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-Uploaded. ''' 15:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks like she has a gray tail tip, and not a highlight.. Can you fix that? 15:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. 20:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:23, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes lighter and brighter, and redden the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:27, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to me like it's only on the outside of the image and in. Lighten the back, darken the neck, lighten some of the legs and tail, and shade behind the shoulders. Breeze whisker  15:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. I re-did the tail shading because it was giving me a headache. :P 18:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and lighten all the shading. 01:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, including the eyes, so it matches the queen. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 17:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for a better idea of what the shading placement should look like, and blur all the shading. 22:39 Sun Jan 1

Re-Uploaded. I re-did her. 19:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the earpink. 19:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bunch. 01:43 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. 21:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job! But can you fix the tail highlight? It still looks as if she was a gray tipped tail. Also, make her nose darker. 21:14, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorreltail (K) Redone
Dear lord help me.....i despise this image....I hate it with a passion....*shudders* Ick, comment? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:59, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the brown quite matches, and darken the shading. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 05:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Took the colors from her queen image....should I Daddy? *Waits for the no like in the chat* And i'll get right on it, daddy. *noms Daddy.* Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 05:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the dapples. 05:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink, blur the patches, and add shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has shading, i'll do all that in a sec. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 15:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:56, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on her face come up to the point as it does on her other chararts. And the black patch on --> this side extends onto her leg in the other chararts. Also, it looks a bit dark, comparatively. 20:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has either blurred/miscolored line art on both of her front legs. 20:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It suppoesed to be like that, its her dapples.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, there's actually blurred lineart there. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm....I see it. I'll get to it tommorrow, Leaving today. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the white. It's looks too close to white. 15:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading around the entire image. 01:00, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 01:46 Tue Jan 3

Sadly, yes. Been swamped wtih work...i'll upload it sometime today.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) Redone
I got permission for Iceheart to redo him instead of making it a tweak. His pelt colored bothered me; I felt it was too close to white. First redo as a warrior (Not on the list yet, but I've had 4 chararts approved) 12:27, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

AGIN! Its rogue, no rougue! ,13:51,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Leaf, chill, its just a typo, it can be fixed. Lighten the shading a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:10, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Chill Leafstorm, and spell correctly if you're going to correct. Shouldn't the black go up farther on his legs to match his leader? Breeze whisker  16:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just reread that. I didn't mean to sound so rude. Sorry Leaf. ^^; Breeze  whisker  16:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. 17:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love Blackstar! The back black paws should be a little more black. 17:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, if they're any darker than you won't be able to see the lineart 17:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant raise to black up or something xD Blur the earpink alittle bit - 17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah sorry. I meant to raise it up so it's level with the front. 17:42, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot the back black paws. 20:51, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black and enlarge the earpink. 20:53, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more - 20:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And blur said shafing. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the black in the ears. 22:41 Sun Jan 1

Blur and lighten the shading more - 00:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white into the black on the ears. 03:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) - Redone
It was on the list for redoing. The stripes needed to be redone. OA was Sandstar12. Comments for improvements? 19:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

it doesnt look brown,..did you take the color from the old pic? .__. - 19:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^ If anything, now, it's the shading. 20:12, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Maybe try thicken the stripes a bit? ,20:21,December 31,2011 (UTC)

OHHHh Now I see it! 8D Define the tail stripes. - 20:27, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 02:21, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changed the style. I thought it looked a little better. =3 Comments? 00:37, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are kinda gingery. Could you desaturate them and either blur them all or smudge them all so they match? Right now only half of them are definitively smudged :P 00:50 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded 01:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:50 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded - ^^ 03:12, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Add/define the shading on the back ear and tail. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  03:52, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:41, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I changed the stripe style, but if the other one was better, I can revert it... 04:01, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
She needed to be redone to match others she was on the list. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 03:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the unshaded bits brighter, they sorta look shiny on the other images. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 03:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda greenish. Make her a little more orange. 03:33, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:40, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 22:10, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (E) - Redone
OA was Minnowclaw. Stripes were strange, shading was almost non-existent, and ear-pink was too neon. Comments? 00:52, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lol, two tabby elders in a row xD There's waste all around the image. 04:20, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:55, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the "highlights' a little bigger. Especially on the thigh and shoulder/chest. Breeze  whisker  03:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Also lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  03:50, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading on teh stripes 03:52, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scarlet  wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  01:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Redstar (L) - Tweaked
Man, I haven't tweaked anything in forever O_o Anyway, he needed white paws and muzzle, OA was Hawktalon with a redo by Cloudy. 23:36, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

muzzle looks almost pure white, add some light shading around it or somthin' (Bloo not logged in)

That's a highlight, so it would be white. There's nowhere to put shading based on where the current light source is. 03:02, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  03:48, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:24, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I know that's where the light source is right now, but could you change it? It looks really weird with the white being all bright there and then all dark on the paws. <span style="">04:40 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded. How's this? 04:54, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (E) ~ Redone
Trying out a different way of doing the pelt (very nervous). If this is not what dusty brown cats look like then google images is a liar. OA was Sandstar and later redone by Mintstarr. Comments? (Hopes to not have head bitten off :S) 02:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Derp just noticed the waste. *fixing that* 02:18, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

After you fix the waste, darken/define the shading. Not bad. I like this :3 <span style="">02:19 Tue Jan 3

It looks cool and all, but she looks mottled now... 02:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

If she has a graying head, desaturate along the along the lineart of the head or something. Her face shouldn't be the only thing grey. And make the shading go along the muscles (Bloo not logged in)

I think the colour looks cool. I'm sure that brown cats aren't the same colour throughout all of their fur, so slight deviations in coloue should be fine. I don't think you need to change it. <span style="">02:32 Tue Jan 3

Re-uploaded :D Thank you Wild (Thought people would hate this.) Please excuse the many uploads. Too many edit conflicts X_X 02:35, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. *is jealous of the epic pelt* 03:09, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yay Thank you Oblivion :D *is relieved* 03:25, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt. E) ~ Redone
Scars and a black cat. Fun. :D Breeze  whisker  02:44, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, OA was Paleclaw. He needed ragged fur and a short muzzle. Breeze whisker  02:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Why are you so good at chararts? ._. *feels inadequate* blur the shading a bit. <span style="">02:46 Tue Jan 3

I agree. I luffles this It kinda looks like someone punched his current one it he face which sent shock waves all through out his body o3o Darken the shading. -- 02:48, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Heheheheh, brighten the unshaded parts just a liiitle bit 02:50, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wow. That was a lot of comments fast. XD I can't darken the shading anymore. It's at 100% opacity for the color I used. I lightened other parts so the shading appears darker. Breeze whisker  02:54, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

and darken the shading on the back - 02:57, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

You could darken the shading by creating a duplicate layer. Just a suggestion :3 03:04, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That looked yucky. I just used a darker color instead. XD Breeze  whisker  03:12, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Why was this listed for a redo? 0.o It's an easy tweak, but it' doesn't really matter. This look better than mine, so I don't have a problem. XD Could you redden the earpink though? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:54, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It said redo so I redid it. XD Now that I think about it that probably would've been a heck of a lot easier. Breeze whisker  05:14, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Whataminute the scars have to match the earpink right? Or am I wrong? 05:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think so Bloo.... Not sure though. :P Could you make the earpink stand out more from the pelt, either way? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:47, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's that scars, skin patches, nose colour (if it's pink) and ear colour should be the same, no? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 18:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes and no. Skin color is usually the same, but you've got to factor in things such as fur and the thickness of the skin. A cat's ears almost appear red when the light it behind them due to the blood vessels which show through due to how thin the ears are. Like the red you see in between your fingers when you hold your hand close to a strong light. And the ears also have fur inside them, which covers up much of the ear pink, and unless you want to draw each hair one at a time, makes the earpink appear close to the color of the cat. So, in this case, the skin in the ears could be the same color as the scars, but due to the fur inside them, the ear appears to be much darker. Breeze whisker  19:41, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

K, smartypants. xD It sorta looks dark grey, make it look more black? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 22:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, too long, didn't read! xD Alright, I admit defeat. Anywhoo it's doesnt looks dark grey, but thats my opinion 23:08, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (KP) - Redone
OA was my lovely apprentice, Thistle. I feel bad redoing her image, but it had to match the others, so.... comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:44, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Theres a tiny line sticking out of her neck. It's at the top left part. *nit-picky* 05:58, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's part of a whisker. Make the earpink more visible. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  21:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

No, it is a tiny line, so erase that. 01:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mintfur (SC) (W)~ Redone
Im the OA, and i hated the shading and the stripes, so I redid it. Promise to do the kit right after this one. 05:47, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Le gasp! I can not stand the awesomeness of this image! Blur the ear-pink just a tad. 05:58, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

It kinda looks like you smudged a line straight down the middle-left side of the chest. Could you fix that so the stripes line up again? Bootiful <3 <span style="">11:00 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded- 01:15, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Gorsestar (D)~ Redone
Redone to match leader. OA was Hollydapple. 05:49, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I luff this ♥ Blur the earpink. 04:01, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) - Redone
I only had MS Paint and Pixlr, but I still managed to make it look good! Original artist was Mistyheart, and the shading was blotchy I believe, but I had permission to redo it. 06:27, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, brighten the earpink, smudge the white in the ear, and erase the waste by the ear. Not bad. <span style="">10:56 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded I also blurred the smudges. 17:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Y u no add eye color? 23:05, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is eye colour. It's just really pale. 00:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Then can you make it a little darker? 00:57, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:45, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

xD Bloo. I don't know if it's just, but the earpink needs to be reddened. 01:47, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, white cats most of the time have pink earpinks. 01:52, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <span style="">02:43 Wed Jan 4

Crookedstar (Ki) - Redone
Hmm I tried match it best, but its too small o_O OA is Icestorm123 and its redoned by Rainwhisper. ,18:58,January 3,2012 (UTC)

Add brown to <--- this side of his cream belly. Also smudge the eye markings up a tad bit 19:07, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes! It looks better now, reuploaded ,19:20,January 3,2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 23:31, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (E)- Tweaked
She needed the white on the muzzle, like the other images. It was really bugging me. x_x <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Lather. Rinse. Obey. 19:47, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

pffft, what's bugging me is the patches. add some shading to them or sumthin' 23:31, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. x_x <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 23:58, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the markings on the haunch (that always bothered me :P) and make the earpink slightly smaller and blur it. <span style="">01:51 Wed Jan 4

Re-uploaded. Bleh. There's always something to annoy someone, isn' there? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 01:58, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nightcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
She was on the tweaking list for it was inconsistent with the queen image. OA was Bramble and then there were a few other people that messed with it, being Moonflight, Frostheart, and Night Shine. Comments for improvement? 21:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Er...what happened to the earpink? xD <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Lather. Rinse. Obey. 21:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

xD fix that and blur it too XD 21:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Fail on the ear-pink. Comments? 21:39, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  21:51, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

It still looks kind of awkward too. 21:56, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps you should redo the earpink...Erase it, fill in that part and redraw it... 21:57, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Fail with the ear-pink. Comments? 22:52, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink like the charart below us. 01:17, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. 01:36, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't mean to sound rude and annoying but, Rainy doesn't use highlights. Sorry *hides* 01:38, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear-pink looks weird still, make it more a triangle and blur it. (Sorry if I sounded mean). <span style="">02:37 Wed Jan 4

Petalnose (W) - Tweaked
Yeah..herein lie my sad pixlr skills...:P 23:24, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

You use pixlr too? Sweet! Anywhoo, lighten her, or at least the unshaded part alittle bit. It says she's almost white, and define the earpink 23:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Very rarely do I use pixlr. =P 23:33, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

OA and why is it tweaked? =3 00:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste between the legs. <span style="">01:49 Wed Jan 4

I think this may only be my computer, but there seems to be a little more black coloring in the eyes than needed. 01:53, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes are fine. I zoomed in on GIMP and looked. 01:55, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Twi. It is my computer, I looked on the little time I had on the PC. Stupid mac... 01:57, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dawncloud (Q) - Redone
Needed to match the warrior/apprentice version, but since the apprentice needed to be redone with the new blanks anyway, and the warrior needed some serious tweaking, I got permission to redo :3 If you guys hate this pattern, though, I'll try to duplicate the one on the warrior. Comments? <span style="">02:46 Wed Jan 4

Personally, I love her warrior image's pattern <3 There's nothing wrong with this one, but could you try and match her warrior? I'd love you forever :D 03:22, January 4, 2012 (UTC)