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Cloud (Storm) (Alt. E)- CBA
Comments? I might need to smooth out the shading, I'll do that tomorrow. 02:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

there's a bit of waste behind the head

next to the ear too actually. also there appears to be shading leaking around the haunch/underbelly area.

The shading should be smoothed too and it wouldn't hurt tk add a tad more depth.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

define light more on the front paws please. --

06:39, 4/17/2019

Reuploaded  23:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the front leg. smooth out the shading on the haunch and add depth everywhere

can you also define the shading on the ear? 02:40 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded  21:42, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

smudge the pelt into the earpink and the shading is still really blotchy. Also, most of the shading suggests that the light is coming from over the back, but the face and the placement of the light in the eye suggests that it's coming from the front 06:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste next to the ear

Reuploaded tried with the shading depth, how does this look? 21:38, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, rump and the space between the belly and tail I think. JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded should be gone now! 02:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading --

16:02, 4/20/2019

Reuploaded how is dis, Silver? 17:02, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste by the tail, legs and head! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  01:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste-free! 02:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. 03:19, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded how's this? 03:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it on the legs and flank, and define it on the face? 13:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice also defined the tail's light. There is already shading on the face, it's below the ear closest to us. 15:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed more, pretty much everywhere, save for the head. There appears to be shading leaking on the tail, belly, and limbs. Can you also define the shading on the one paw furthest from us and inside the ear?

I'll work on this soon. Who said that, btw? 22:55, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Patch said it, the power of history logs! 00:33, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and smooth the shading you erased on the tail and front paws? Every time you erase shading, you're gonna want to smooth it out. ^^ 12:50, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded green shading is sometimes no but today is yes 23:14, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Very nice! 19:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but the light source is contradictory. The back/legs/most of it shows it coming like so, but the facial shading is on the wrong side. Whipped up an example of what I meant - green is where there should be no shading/light, blue is what should be shaded given the source, red is just the front legs which need their shading smoothed since it's too sharp from the last erasure, and the purple is the belly shading, which is leaking away from the lineart.

Reuploaded oh no what I have I done to this shading  00:07, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the belly is still leaking away from the lineart. Also, the added shading on the face and ears is much lighter than the rest and could stand to be darkened^^ Additionally, there's leaking shading on the bottom side of the tail, a new sharp erasure mark, and the light on the front legs could be defined with a smoother transition - it did solve the erasure mark issue, but was over blurred and removed the light that was present.

Reuploaded take 300 with purple shading  03:11, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Better^^ Define the shading depth on the front paws/legs and there's sharp erasure marks at the base of the tail

Reuploaded  19:35, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Still sharp there at the base of the tail, just where it meets the bum

Wait does this have the match the Alt TOEH? 22:14, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

It might have to but from the site, the pale gray was seen in sign of the moon for her toeh rank and her elder was cited for Outcast.  Ellie  life is an illusion 22:29, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

For some reason when I try to change the base she turns white. I'll reup momentarily. 01:36, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:42, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

The alts do need to match in color, we have historically matched alt sets to each other like this. If you need the file I can shoot it to you.

Reuploaded nope, I have the TOEH on a colorpick layer that I turn on/off  01:13, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste floating about. Earpink seems just slightly darker here; it's #b99193 on the toeh, and could also use some smoothing out. The eye colors here also don't match

Reuploaded ahh figured  22:28, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

SORRY THIS IS LATE. CBA? 16:28, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie  Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Reuploaded. I like the eye color of the apprentice pic more oof :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  13:19, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

What are the lighter blotches on her? Are those highlights? If so, tone them down (on the opacity bar). Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The pupils appear to be inconsistent in color- one eye has a darker black than the other. Shading is still leaking in some places. Don't worry! I struggle with that as well. Fill those blank areas with shading- I can provide a redline if you want. Smooth out the shading everywhere- just smooth out the edges with the blur or smudge tool, Gaussian Blur makes shading leak away, only use it if you want a really good shading gradient. You have unfilled pixels on > this side of the tail. Sorry for the wall of text! You're doing good so far! 22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Potato! <3 And thank you so much for the redline if you can provide!!! I feel so foolish… <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Here. Red= fill in/add shading. Blue= Remove shading to fit your light source. Green=Waste. Delete that. Yellow= missing/light pixels. Magenta= blur/smudge and tone down the highlights. Hope this helps! (if I mess up on the source sorry if I do). 22:31, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Aww thank you Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  03:40, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm it doesn't appear you did what I said. Did you reupload the right file? The only difference I see is that the highlight blotches are set to a higher opacity.. I meant to lower them, then blur/smudge. If you need any more help, let me know! 03:51, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof... maybe it's the .mpd file, I guess? :P Anyway :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

What is that on her belly? If that's shading depth you need to lighten it and blur/smudge it. Lighten the highlight spots on her legs more and then blur/smudge them. Smooth out the shading and make >> this pupil darker to match <<this pupil. Let me know if you need to elaborate! 13:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! :D School's so busy these days :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:46, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of brown in her eye and smooth the shading on her face.

Highlights are making her turn gray in some areas- if you haven't set them to overlay, you should as I think that should help. 01:35, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail please. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:08, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 0px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:47, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

The tips of her front paws are missing some color and her bottom is too. Her forehead has a dark smudge, I don't know if it's shading or part of her or a mistake.

17:15, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

It's shading :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  06:54, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

There's Gray littered about her, smooth shading on stomach, shoulder and on her forehead. Her set looks like it has a faint, paintbrushy texture. This also looks like it might be a bit of a different color than her set. This looks even sort of red. The texture is most notable on the warrior and can be found on File:Sorrelstripe.warrior.png <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:11, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes appear to be two seperate colors, one is more brownish than the other (>>> this one). 17:37, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hollyflower (E) ~ For Approval
mega hollyflower

09:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading, and define it on the white? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:00, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also extend the white on the tail (or at least one part of it) to reach the end of the tail? 20:07, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reups

04:16, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

The white on the too doesn't seem to be showing? She's suppose to have it I beleive. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:20, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sorry but what is the 'too'?

12:49, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe the white on the tail? I can't get what Mink's talking about either.. 15:15, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

It is definitely the tail, the white looks very gray there Malina457 (talk) 15:51, April 28, 2019 (UTC)malina

The tail white on the underside could stand to be smudged out with slightly longer strokes, I think, to match the queen's styling

I was talking about the white on the tail, my phone autocorrected. The star shows it on the top and bottom of the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:07, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

the queen shows it in the same way, the white is very gray due to the shading and i dont think i can do anything about it.

09:54, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe you could try adding some highlights on the white of the tail to lighten it a bit? Or you could make a separate shading layer and put the tail shading on that and set it too a low opacity, so there is shading, but it doesn't make it appear too gray. 03:02, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

reups

13:23, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

I still think the white on the tail should be smudged more, longer strokes instead of short ones just back and forth; the queen shows it feathering out

reups

09:40, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:11, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but looking at her other images, the white should be softer.

I'm sorry but what do you mean? 05:06, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

white looks smoother on her other images. Either smudge/blur it

reups 09:31, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Dark Brown Kit (K) ~ CBA
I hope I named this right... -Shadow  hOnK :o)  22:53, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and smooth out the shading. I think the name is correct but with these guys it doesn't matter until after the image is approved. 23:01, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  14:17, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? 12:19, April 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:22, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

You're image needs to be renamed to NP-3.kit-1.png.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  10:02, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

I gotchu. ^^ Please continue to reupload over File:NP-3.kit-1.png. 13:34, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a bit more on the tail? 15:54, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  14:37, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:29, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Tornear (E) ~ For Approval
If the OA of the star can send me a psd file (and also tell my how you did the stripes??) then that would be great! If that's not possible, color codes would be good enough. Tinystream (talk) 21:59, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are more bunched together and greater in number <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:49, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

this actually matches really really well lol. id only say make the stripes thicker and softer. i would offer you the file but i really dont think you need it 23:16, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

Have got some time still, but are you still working?

Yes, I am. I'll try to reup tomorrow. Tinystream (talk) 06:27, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Mottled brown warrior (W) ~ CBA
welp hope i named this correctly  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:51, 4/30/2019> ​

You have waste near the bend of the tail. 00:26, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pinks seem to be separate colors? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:10, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

re-up  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <01:15, 5/01/2019> ​

There's some waste in between the feet- let me know if you need a redline. 01:32, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading in the ---> ear? 12:37, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

I don't see any waste? r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <00:44, 5/03/2019> ​

i think potato means this

12:25, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

None of the other warriors have that part removed though. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:41, 5/03/2019> ​

Never mind, I'm an idiot, please ignore the above message. r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <00:04, 5/04/2019> ​

re-up  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:53, 5/05/2019> ​

CBA? 13:41, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Black River Clan Warrior ~ CBA
Been a while, eh? Anyway, i love this blank Malina457 (talk) 01:47, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina Define the earpink and smooth out the shading. It could also be expanded on the tail. The heading is missing "For Approval" as well. 02:37, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 02:44, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

this is like...REALLY black lol, is there any way u could lighten the color to see the lineart/shading better? 16:57, May 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Not going to ignore your comment, but, this is just as dark as all my other black cats, so may I ask for a second opinion?? Malina457 (talk) 17:26, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

I don't wanna be rude, but it is kinda hard for me to see the lineart.. 18:54, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

I too cannot see the lineart. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  21:48, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

According to the guidelines (I think), seeing the lineart is not mandatory. However, I do agree this needs to be lightened as I cannot make out any lineart or the shading. 22:05, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

No no, you aren't being rude, thanks for additional input i'll lighten it right away! Malina457 (talk) 22:37, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

Could you also define the eye depth? -- 22:41, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups for base, ill get to eyes later Malina457 (talk) 22:43, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups for all this time Malina457 (talk) 22:52, May 1, 2019 (UTC)malina

Also note, I will not be adjusting the tint of the cat, it is based on my own cat Malina457 (talk) 00:14, May 2, 2019 (UTC)malina

You might have to adjust something- I can't see the image at all and it looks pitch-black with colored eyes. ​​​​

the cat lookss fine ti my monitor Malina457 (talk) 23:24, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

I see the image, but I do agree with Jayce- the base is still too dark and I can't make out the shading and lineart. 23:40, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

I can clearly see it, argh, ok it's already 4 shades lighter than black, I'll see what i can do? Malina457 (talk) 00:20, May 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

Hm.. I can't see it either maybe try a dark gray (#171616) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:23, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

reups i tried a lighter shade  Malina457 (talk) 00:32, May 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

I'm sorry but I still can't see anything XD - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:35, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

It might be because your base is a really dark blue, its really blue tinted but I can see it fine <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:43, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

May have to redo shading for the 15th time cause for some reason it isnt showing? Malina457 (talk) 01:03, May 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

I'm seeing it fine? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:50, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

It was just a monitor failure oops. Anyway I'll stop cluttering up now lol. Malina457 (talk) 15:53, May 3, 2019 (UTC)malina

Could you smooth the shoulder shading a bit? 21:09, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 23:04, May 4, 2019 (UTC)malina

CBA? 16:30, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Light Colored TC Kit - For Approval
cute <span style="">04:52 Wed May 1

could you smooth the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:12, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">19:54 Wed May 1

Can you define the light source? And I don't think the shading by the eye should be there, or it should at least be reduced. -- 22:41, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Since this is from a manga, shouldn't it be grayscale and have the texture removed? 19:54, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

You are right, Bluestar. Cam you smooth out the shading more? 22:31, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">05:48 Fri May 3

Optional, but maybe the lighten the shading a few ticks? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:15, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">16:59 Fri May 3

Where's the source coming from? With how it's on the face and haunch it seems to suggest < way, but if it were so I don't think shading on the backside/ > side of the tail base is needed

Dawncloud (E) ~ For Approval
wassup  r ♥   <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <00:02, 5/02/2019> ​

Sharpen the stripes and there should be more on the back/sides. <span style="">18:25 Thu May 2 2019

Spiderfoot (Alt. W) - CBA
the image from BOTC just showed really choppy, dark stripes on his legs and haunch, which'd hardly make for a suitable pattern, so I went ahead and extended the tabby pattern 16:22, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

It might be me, but I think it needs to match that image strile wise placement. The stripes look more ticked than anything and that's a pretty suitable pattern. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:24, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

I think this is fine. If anything, just thicken the stripes on the back a bit. <span style="">18:24 Thu May 2 2019

I agree with Breezey on this; you really can't tell what kind of tabby pattern it is due to the coloring and overall darkness of the image. It's fine. ​​​

There's some waste underneath the tail. <span style="">20:29 Thu May 2

Hmm there's also waste floating about other spots in general. The shading's also leaking away from the lineart slightly at the base of the chest

Re-uploaded lol had the wrong tabby layer turned on   05:57, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:31, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Dark-Colored TC Kit (Ki) ~ CBA
Comments? 19:52, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Optional, but perhaps smudge the stripe a bit more? ;)  22:35, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

With how thin thin the stripe is, I'd rather not smudge it. 03:25, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could your define the shading on the haunch, belly, and face? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:29, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  14:38, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:58, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:31, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Pigeonfoot (W) ~ CBA
i tried to follow the kit sprite more closely than the apprentice one :O 22:51, May 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the light on the face, tail, and foreleg closest to us 03:38, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Might you brighten up the white? This is looking very dark, and I think the white on the kit is pure white (or #FFFFFF, should you want a hex number). ​​​​​​

reuploaded 23:16, May 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Smooth the shading on the chest a bit? 21:08, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 01:05, May 5, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 16:32, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Tanglefur (E) ~ CBA
him tangle 23:35, May 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading? *hands you a hairbrush to brush his pelt*  23:39, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded  00:45, May 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 16:33, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Onestar (Alt W) ~ For Approval
this isn't the best but I tried. I matched it to File:Onestar.leader.alt.png <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:45, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit more ^^ 21:07, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt. Ki 3) - For Approval
Not sure if this is right, but wanted to attempt this alt thing. 11:12, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

can you smoothen the texture and define the shading depth? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:26, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  00:51, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also expand the shading the shading okn the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:20, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 01:30, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Two tabbies (DF) - CBA
18:08, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Oakstep (E) ~ CBA
19:25, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

the tabby stripes seem softer here than on the star, but much more blurred on the others for some reason. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:27, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

I was matching what was on the original elder, which came before the star. 19:29, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a little?

Re-uploaded. 19:32, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch, its a little hard to see <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:19, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:25, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 13:41, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Woodpaw (K) - CBA
23:17, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture, it's really faint on the apprentice. 23:35, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

While it may be difficult to see, the apprentice has pale 'heather' blue eyes. These seem more silvery grey =) 00:54, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reup they were blue before, but the wiki tends to wash colors out 18:18, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the neck/front shoulder area? 21:06, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reup  02:09, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Cedarheart (E) - CBA
hooo boy it's been a while since i did a solid cat without texture  03:49, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 16:34, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Little Tom (Kit) ~ For Approval
i really hope i named this right ;w; 17:13, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

It's named right. However, can you darken the base? This looks like a purple-brown color, not black. 17:18, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink less neon as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 17:29, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 18:49, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

This doesn't look black, sorry. I think you should try colorpicking off Hollyleaf for a lack of better examples. 19:42, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

it looks pretty black to me? it's a warm black  20:17, May 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Well I colorpicked this and got #312621, and it's between the brown-gray spectrum. 20:58, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

I second that. Even with my brightness up, it looks brown. Perhaps try de-saturating it? 21:05, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! if it's still too brown, ill color-pick off someone else! 21:31, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

You need to dethumb the image and the base still looks brown.. sorry man. 21:34, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Does't look  brown to be Malina457 (talk) 03:43, May 5, 2019 (UTC)malina

It is brown, I do agree it should be a different tint <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:50, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! the tint was an issue, so i changed it! I checked the file on my phone, and it did look rlly brown.. 13:29, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Small tabby kit (Ki)- For Approval
Comments? 21:33, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste at the tip of the ear closest to us. And if you can, smooth out the tabby stripes.

21:43, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the forelegs. If you're going for a pointed tabby look, I'd add more stripes to the face and lessen them a bit on the hip 21:53, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded baby kitty  22:11, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, I cant see it at all <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:50, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:15, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a change? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:52, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the change, the shading is much more defined. could you smooth it out on the head and the shoulder area? and perhaps expand it more on the tail? i love the stripes!

Could you darken the shading more? The tint itself is a bit too light (That's most likely the issue) perhaps darken the tint to a much darker purple. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:57, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:56, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fluffy gray kit (ITW) (K) - For Approval


Cute. Smooth out the shading on the haunch and tail? 22:11, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded changed the shading

Bird (E) ~ For Approval
23:03, 5/4/19

Wow! This is amazing! Can you desaturate the earpink? It's really bright and neon. 23:24, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you! 23:48, 5/4/19

This is really good. Could you make the booty stripes lessen, her other images (File:Bird.loner.png) don't seem to have much there. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:55, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you define shading depth on the head just a tad?

reuploaded 14:37, 5/5/19

I'm gonna bump ya up to an apprentice, since you clearly know what you're doing. ^^ You can use "for approval" from now on. 00:19, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Feathertail (alt kit) ~ For Approval
i think i was too ambitious lol. colour-picked from and tried to match the toeh, then the app/star when i could quite see the pattern well. idk how i feel about it

Define the shading in the middle section of her? Like where the front leg and chest is, kinda looks a tad flat over there. 14:58, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

reups changed the whole shading, i was confused about the source lol

OS-3 elder 1 - For Evaluation
my first PCA image, I'm still learning Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:29, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

You need to have the heading be OS-3 elder 1- For Evaluation, since you are a kit in the project at the moment. Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink showing. 16:36, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for double commenting, but can you remove the waste around the elder? What I do is I use the lasso tool on the program I use and circle everywhere where there's darkness and hit delete. You can also use the magic wand tool, go to your transparent layer, select outside of the lineart, and go back to your base/shading layers and hit delete. 16:53, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded!Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:59, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink could use a lot of blurring/smudging at the edges. Define the shading on the face and ears, and define the shading depth. To do that, add a thinner, darker layer of shading. Can you give some variation to the stripes so they're not just facing the same direction and have the same width? Lastly, the stripes on the neck and back border on being a triangle tabby- a pattern that was ruled out for being unrealistic. I'd reccomend to make them more like the other stripes. If you need me to elaborate, let me know! 17:35, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The back/neck stripes look fine, but the one stripe on the shoulder connecting to the head does look out of place. I can redline if need be. Also the shading needs to be defined everywhere.

this needs to be short-furred since they're windclan