Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 126

Lionblaze (Alt. Warrior) ~ Approved
First time I've truly loved how my texture came out (thank you for the tutorial, Ferk). Comments? 21:07, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

His eyes should be amber, like his other images. Also blur/smudge the shading (whatever your preference is) so it's a bit smoother. Could you also smudge or smooth out the texture a bit more too? All in all (I'm being nitpicky), this is really good. .o.

Reuploaded. I didn't realize the eyes had to match even if it's an alt. And thanks. 21:26, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Hey no problem! I'm sorry I never got around to that other one.... Oops. Anyway, friend, the texture on the tail should curve with the tail. It looks like it's all going one way. I wanna know how everyone gets their texture to look feathery like this. Please tell me how. Mine looks blocky and lame. 22:04, 10/6/2014

It looks like you've got a blank spot of shading on the back. Did you mean to do that? Ferk, try blurring your texture. That's how I get mine to look somewhat normal. 10:14 PM, Mon Oct 6, 2014

Reuploaded. Basicly, I put the texture layer on multiply and added the texture. Then, I blur it (using blur tool), and  used the smudge tool at a size of 05 (Gimp). I set the layer opacity and then duplicated it (mostly to give it definition). And yes, I meant to do that. 22:22, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading.

Reuploaded. 23:39, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and feet, and blur (and possibly expand) the tail shading, mainly around the base of the  tail. 06:39, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:48, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

No comments in a while, and I like this, so CBA? 14:44 Sun Oct 12

Sorry, but the shading on the side by the haunch is blotchy with a light patch surrounded by shadows. Also, you might want to curve the shading edges a bit more and blur it. And slightly nit-picking, but the shading is receding from the lineart on the back of the cat. 01:47, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. I've used this style of shading before (see Mistystar's Alt Warrior image), and no one commented on it before. As for the receding shading, it's actually the texture, and I can't really fix it. However, I'll change it if someone else agrees. 19:59, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Atelda. 00:47, 10/14/2014

Reuploaded. 00:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Remove the patch of light on the flank by filling it in with shading. 1:22 Tue Oct 14

Reuploaded. 20:07, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out your shading a bit. It seems really really dark in some spots and then really really light in other spots. 16:08, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is not required to be the same darkness throughout the entire image. While we're on the topic of shading, would you mind extending it and maybe adding some light, as I kinda did here? Red is where I think it could be expanded, and the blue would be the light. I also remember hearing that not all the back feet would be in shading unless the cat is sitting awkwardly- but I could be mistaken about that, and someone else is more than allowed to contradict me on that note.

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. 18:42, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading in the center of the body, darken the tail shading, define the head shading, and on the back leg closest to us, flip the shading and the light. It is backwards since your lightsource would have the light on top and the shading on the bottom. 19:56, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. Like I said before, I've used this style and lightsource before (the lightsource is coming from the top left corner), and it was never commented on. Also, I can see all of the shading just fine, and if I lighten the shading in the center of the body, I'll probably just be told to darken it again. However, if others agree, I'll change it. 20:13, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think your shading is fine. Beautiful job! 5:34 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Define the shading on the tail, and the shading and light on the feet. 14:29, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading is about as defined as it can get. 19:58, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a tad on the tail and body, it looks a bit too dark. 1:14 Tue Oct 21

Reuploaded. 12:53, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading on the back leg closest to us? This is pretty 15:19 Wed Oct 22

I think it's fine. However, if others agree, I'll change it. 18:37, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Amber. It does appear kinda flat.

Reuploaded. Changes. 18:55, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved 11:17, October 25, 2014 (UTC)