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Whispering Breeze (Ki) ~ For Approval
itty bitty kitty 21:47 Thu Feb 5

Define shading everywhere. Can't see any. Also, smoothen the stripes. 23:52, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, and Darken the stripes please. 23:54, February 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think thickening the stripes will do, tbh. Define the texture too. This is lovely :) ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:15, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't any texture, just how the stripes are smudged. 00:38 Fri Feb 6

re-upped 00:43 Fri Feb 6

Regardless of the texture stuff, could you define it? Also, lighten up the shading. Remember, defining isn't always darkening, it's making it more visible. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 08:06, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

Also, thicken the stripes a tad more. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 08:08, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups how do i define the texture if there isn't any? like there literally isn't any texture on the image how do i define what does not exist (sorry if i'm rude it's 6:30 in the morning and i have a cold) 12:31 Fri Feb 6

I know it's not texture, but could you define the fur thingy (X.X)? While you're at it, can you shrink down her pale chest. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:34, February 6, 2015 (UTC)

boop a doop doop re-uploaded <span style="">12:46 Fri Feb 6

Smudge her pale chest fur into her darker fur some more. She's lookin' gorgeous ^.^ 10:57, February 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups i know she's so pretty <3 <span style="">14:58 Sat Feb 7

re-ups there was some waste on her nose from the chest <span style="">15:01 Sat Feb 7

Thin out the pale chest a little bit and define the shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:42, February 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have a second opinion on the pale chest? It looks fine to me. i'll probably upload tomorrow, really bummed out because i lost the file of an image i spent a really long time on <span style="">19:17 Sun Feb 8

Yeah, the pale chest could be bigger a bit 16:24, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups also tried to do a version with jayie's shading which can be found here <span style="">23:16 Mon Feb 9

Blur the neck shading a tad and define the shading on this <--- front visible leg. 22:58, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups ladies and gentlemen we have tapped out at 8 layers of shading <span style="">23:09 Wed Feb 11

There is waste on the right ear. 19:57, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Just discovered some waste on the left, too. 20:07, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Would you mind defining the ear pink in (our) right ear? Maybe removing a little bit of shading according to the lightsource will do the trick. Cutie! 22:43, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, please.-- 22:45, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can I get a second opinion on the shading? It looks fine but if someone agrees then I'll do that <span style="">22:48 Fri Feb 13

I don't think it needs smoothing - maybe give it a little blur on the throat, the (our) right side of the head and the legs. 22:51, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

waste has been slain <span style="">23:59 Fri Feb 13

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
OK, I shouldnt be doing black cats on this laptop because the colors are all screwed up and I have to squint to see the shading. But here. 20:01, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her maybe and dull down the Ear Pink. She looks grey on my screen. (correct me if I am wrong about the earpink)  20:14, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a blacked out nose? <span style="">03:09 Tue Feb 10

Actually, I think I asked Breezey about this once, and black cats don't need to have black noses. I think they can have a darker reddish nose, or something along those lines.

Mind darkening him a tad? He seems pretty light. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 10:45, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Brambleshade already said that, Burntclaw^^ Also, may you define the tail shading? 15:55, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Dew Nose 19:46, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over :P 22:13, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Updated 23:12, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice job! 23:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna bring attention to the fact that it's got the wrong file name; could an admin fix that for Bramble? 00:07, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe I could fix it. 00:09, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There we go. I really like her :3 00:11, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mind lightening up the ear pink a little? Gorgeous, Bramble :$ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I think she is one fine kitty <3 Any better? 00:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the legs, and define the light on the legs. <span style="">12:57 Wed Feb 11

Updated I wonder if this has any difference... 19:44, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten ear pink a bit-- 19:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. 21:22, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Stone Song (P3) Ancient ~ For Approval
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 06:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes look unsmudged/blurred compared to his other images. Mind blurring them/smudging them some? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:15, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded also added foot stripes i forgot 09:54, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Mind define the shading on the back? He's gorgeous!^^  00:16, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't shading on the back. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:50, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

But, shouldn't there be? 01:19, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

nope no back shading, the source doesn't call for it. 01:22, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define tail shading. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:28, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it just fine. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 13:04, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Is it my eyes, or is his base slightly lighter on his sharpclaw image?

Looks about the same to me^^ 20:31, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I colour picked off the sharpclaw theres probably just more lighter blue than darker blue i there 00:39, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you just define the shading on all the visible paws just a tad? If you don't want to though, that's fine. He's very handsome^^ 23:45, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded thanks 03:08, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Fish Leap (Ancient) ~ CBA
Gahh, it's been ages since Hawky did charart. <span style="">17:39 Tue Feb 10

Define the light on the tail? he's a pretty kitty <span style="">22:47 Tue Feb 10

Re-uploaded. Thank you. c: <span style="">1:39 Wed Feb 11

I still think it could be defined a tad. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's rather difficult to define the light in this case: I have the dark side facing the light and the light side in shadow. If you want me to lighten it up more, it won't be the dark brown it needs to be. <span style="">0:30 Thu Feb 12

???? His Softpaw's tail is only striped, does it have a lighter base color on it? ._. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:44, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Yes there's a lighter base. <span style="">1:48 Thu Feb 12

Define the tongue shading and the paw which is overlapping the other paw over <--- here's shading. This is gorgeous, wonderful job Hawky. c: 02:14, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

I know there's a lighter base.... But if there aren't big patches of darker brown, then you should be able to define the light on the tail. Try erasing some shading and maybe add a few highlights? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:11, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the tail shading is fine as it is, and this is bordering on being picky. I can see the light on the tail just fine- and it doesn't need to be super-defined to know it's there. Different blanks, different shading styles, and different pelt colors will show different results. While it might not work for some, this clearly works for this image.

I also think it's fine. Though, do define the shading on the very <== leg. <span style="">12:38 Thu Feb 12

Re-uploaded. Thank you. <span style="">0:19 Fri Feb 13

Lighten up the back ear and neck maybe? Please correct me if I am wrong... 20:03, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

They're supposed to be dark so I'll leave them that way unless others agree. <span style="">17:36 Sat Feb 14

They look fine to me, Hawky. 23:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

-steals charart- this is stunning. CBA? 00:59, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Storm Pelt (ki) ~ For Approval
I hate his dad but his mom is nice I guess 19:26, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Would he need a bushy tail or..? 22:28, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think so. He wasn't named for the tail, so as far as I know that just means longhair blank. If we gave lineart tweaks to every cat described with a bushy or plumy tail, like half the cats would have lineart tweaks. 00:03, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the mottles? I can't see them 05:57, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the tail shading more. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:29, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 00:05, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:28, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

re-up 01:39, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have a pink nose? and I think its leaking at the bottom of the tail. 20:08, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, this is a grey cat, they normally have dark noses. Also, what's leaking? You should be a bit more specific so the artist knows exactly what to fix. <span style="">20:44, 02/13/2015

I believe he means the shading; but I just think that's a patch of lighter fur. 22:41, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yep, just checked - it's a lighter fur patch 23:08, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink a little bit, it seems really bright compared to the pelt color. 11:23, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Jagged Lightning (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I like his name. Comments? 21:56, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

The sharpclaw isn't smudged as much on the white as this one- mind dulling it down a bit?

Re-uploaded. 03:06, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail? This is gorgeous =) <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:30, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. =) 03:41, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking where the rump or where the foot is starting at. Ok. Easier words: Hind leg. 19:59, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the white just a tad on his belly? Its not that big of a deal, though. So if you'd prefer not to, thats fine with me. 22:44, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't even know how that leaked. :/ Fixed it. And I smudged the shading on the white chest a tad more, but other than that I think it's fine, you can still tell it's white. 02:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a tad bit on the paws? I like him. 03:52, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, I like him too. c: 23:39, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Dew Nose (Ki) ~ CBA
Yay, kits. Is this splotchy enough? 23:59, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I just have this strange feeling the face needs more shading... Correct me if I am wrong   00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 00:37, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, the white-tipped nose and tail don't seem to stand out. Could you brighten the white on that nose white and maybe spread it a bit, and spread out and brighten the white tail-tip? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:57, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

reups 16:39, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Could you expand that white tip more, past that first stripe perhaps? Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:55, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I was hoping to keep the white on the tail small, and the first stripe visible V_V 22:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

You think you could define the shading a little tad? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:26, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

reups 01:21, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

<p class="MsoNormal">I think the shading could be defined on the front forepaw. 19:55, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Would you mind defining the light on the tail a smidge? He's adorable! 22:37, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

reups 15:58, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 00:58, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Dove's Wing (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Kis szürke cica :3 20:58, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a little more. <span style="">21:48 Wed Feb 11

Re-ups 17:52, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? she looks nice <span style="">22:18 Thu Feb 12

I cant really see the earpink. Like Giaria said, beautiful!^^ 01:36, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks :3 13:23, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Do you mind darkening the shading just a tad? Its blending into the pelt in some places. If you'd prefer not to, thats fine with me. =)-- 22:34, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:34, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back foot. <span style="">00:35 Sun Feb 15

Re-ups 14:16, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt L 5) ~ For Approval
I tried to add some texture, but it failed miserably so I just got rid of that. I've never done a leader before; comments? There's some waste under her hind-quarter, which I will remove on my next upload. 21:43, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking. (i think bluestar is cursed) <span style="">21:48 Wed Feb 11

Define the earpink a bit. Splendid job, Sorrel. =) 23:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on her legs. Also, smooth it out in a lot of places, like the legs and the tail. 09:11, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

I see a couple of errors besides the waste on the lower rump: There is a grey pixel on her right eye, there is waste on the nicked ear, and waste on her whiskers and the neck. 19:52, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 22:33, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the earpink a bit? 03:53, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it. 09:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I think it's alright. 15:07, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Coal (NP) (Ro) ~ For Approval
okay. 07:01, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

The other Coal isn't archived... ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:32, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I just archived it because it's early in the morning, I just got off work, and this time it's my fault since I neglected to archive a withdrawn image like I usually do. I'm not feeling well and starting an argument over something as minor as this is just...really dumb. Same with all the other ones that have happened. I'm not gonna start crap over that anymore- it's not worth it and it's counterproductive. My apologies, Breeze.

Define the shading on the back legs please. 19:49, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Its fine, Jayce. Its partly my fault for not paying attention, so theres no need to apologize. =) 22:26, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink and scar a bit? 03:55, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (Ki) - For Approval
Yes, the shading is black. I don't feel like tinting it since it's not mandatory and it doesn't look green.

Define the shading, and maybe smooth it out a little. <span style="">15:51 Fri Feb 13

Re-uploaded.

If you zoom into the bottom of the picture, you can see waste at the front foot. 19:47, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope I got it... that's odd, though...there's never waste on my images with how I have my layers...

Yeah, that is strange, but you got it off. 20:01, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Mind defining the shading on the ---> front leg? I can barely see any. This looks great =).-- 22:31, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I doesn't need defining, but it could use a little blur. 00:57, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Tiger does it again. =P 03:15, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Very pretty~ =) nice job. 03:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks 03:48, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Eye depth could still be defined, try switching the place here the dark part of the eye starts. 11:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Mew 15:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws a tad. <span style="">15:46 Sat Feb 14

Re-upped 16:06, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you give the shading a bit more depth? 00:55, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Frogtail (Kit) ~ Withdrawn
lol here is this li'l kit :) 02:00, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

I've fixed the placement for you. Get rid of all the waste, define the shading, and make sure that everything is under the lineart. Also, there should be kind of a soft texture to match his other images. Good fr your first, though! ^^ <span style="">02:09 Sun Feb 15

Also, this image should be named Frogtail.kit.png can an admin fix this for them <span style="">02:10 Sun Feb 15

Also, this image should say "For Evaluation" instead of "For Approval" since you are just a kit in the project. Also, define the earpink. 02:16, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re- Upped ugh how do u put the pic in the other corner? -- 03:54, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Just remove the thumbnail. ^^ Can you define the shading a bit more? 03:58, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

The linear art looks cut off. Also, mind darkening him a tad? He looks lovely, this looks wonderful :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:03, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re- Upped, anything else? -- 16:12, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Are you /sure/ that everything is below the lineart? A few places still look off-color, namely the ears and face. The lineart should be pure black. <span style="">16:51 Sun Feb 15

Okay, I'll take a look at it. Going to my sister's piano recital in an hour... -- 16:59, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re- Upped! Cleaned him up and re-did eyes, hope that it is better 😃.-- 18:03, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but that looks exactly like my version I had up before you took over, in fact, side by side they are identical. Please don't steal others' art, it could get you into a lot of trouble. I'm going to guess you didn't know, so I'm just going to kindly ask you take my art down and create your own version. Thank you. 20:45, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

meh. i wanna do another cat :/ ~ withdawing. -- 23:39, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

WAIT! ILL DO IT! plz? --ES BumbleBee (talk) 23:52, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

You have to reserve it on the table first, and please don't use caps. 23:53, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Broken Shadow (Ancient) - For Approval
I'm really starting to like this new shading style. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:13, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink and the shading on the tail? Lovely ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:48, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Defined the shading on the tail - the earpink was colorpicked from her sharpclaw. I also upped the saturation on the shading. It's annoying, the shading looks way too dark and brightly saturated on my iPad, but on my laptop it doesn't look saturated enough. :/ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 08:18, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Petal (Ro) (Star) ~ For Approval
She's a beauty :p comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Simply lovely! Add a  bit of shading to her side maybe? 15:01, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Um, that is a bit vague, I don't get what you mean. I added shading to her side as the light is coming from ==> there. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 15:06, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? It looks dark on my phone, but if you think it's fine then leave it. she's pretty <span style="">15:52 Sun Feb 15

On my phone it looks fine. 16:53, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Looks perfect on my iPad and Mac,don't change anything yet! 🐈 -- 17:26, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit. <span style="">22:52 Sun Feb 15

Talon (Loner) ~ For Approval
Two new cats for approval on the approval page within a minute XD Comments? I'm proud of this. 08:34, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws? He's handsome. 13:27, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you~ 13:33, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define ear pink, other than that he's gorgeous! 😃 -- 17:30, February 15, 2015 (UTC)