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Graystripe - Silver Nomination
I'm surprised he's not already gold. :) I don't own many of the books so I may need help with the improvements.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:13, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

For such a major character, he has awfully short history for several sections, particularly some of the original series ones. Those definitely need fleshing out and he could probably use a general look over if someone has time. insane brick'd 21:29, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'd do it myself, but I don't have any of the books. If anyone would like to do it, that would be great. I mean, come on, it's Graystripe! :)-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:39, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I've been editing Graystripe for a few days, he could need some extension in the OS, but I don't know if I should do it. Sky wish16  Nannerpus, the banana peel 00:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

If you have the books, you're more than welcome too as I don't own those books.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 01:14, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wait. Do we need a citation for Tigerstar mentoring him? Quailflight 09:34, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah we should. It should be in Into the Wild.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 10:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Not just Into the Wild, but a page source, too. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:42, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Does anyone have the page? It's after Lionheart dies.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 12:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I have Into the Wild, but I can't find it. Quailflight 19:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I read Into the Wild, starting after Lionheart died all the way to the end. There's acually nothing that says Tigerclaw mentored Graypaw. There was one point when Graypaw when to a training session with Tigerclaw and Ravenpaw, but there was never an official ceremony or anything after that Night  Fall 04:42, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I was reading Fire and Ice and Bluestar said when Graystripe and Fireheart got apprentices, she told Fireheart to pass down all he learned from Tigerclaw and Lionheart. Maybe we could get a citation for that? Quailflight 14:37, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

You mean Graystripe? If so, that would work.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:51, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

No, it was Fireheart. Bluestar mentioned only Lionheart to Graystripe. But I think it would be relevant enough for Graystripe. Quailflight 19:54, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well, wasn't Graypaw's training almost complete when Lionheart died. I'll be able to check on Tuesday, since I'll be getting the Original Series then.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 15:48, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. I'm in Chapter 17 in ItW all the cats are sitting vigil for Lionheart and it says nothing about Tigerclaw taking over Graypaw's training. What do you think? Should we keep Tigerstar on or not?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:38, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

As for fleshing out the OS section, I've added more to his Rising Storm section. He's only seen at the end, but he's mentioned alot by Fireheart and Bluestar.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:06, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Battles of the Clans is missing. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators  and  suffering all around 10:40, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I haven't finished BotC yet so could someone give me a hand please?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 14:24, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone still working on this article? insane brick'd 12:56, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I am. I just finished his BotC section. How is he now?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 17:12, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Is he ready for silver? Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   19:38, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think his OS sections could be more detailed considering he's such a major character, right now they're fairly general. insane brick'd 17:53, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Would someone be willing to fix him up? I'm going on vacation so I won't be able to work on him. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   11:03, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to expand some of his book sections. ♥Ice shine★  17:21, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

You did a good job, too, Iceshine! I think that he's ready for silver, myself, although the sections that should be checked most carefully are his Original Series sections. He's not such a major character anymore, but he definitely was way earlier. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you guys, so much, for fixing him up when I couldn't. I'm leaving on vacation for a week tomorrow. I won't be able to fix him up. If anyone would like to fix him up while I'm gone, I'll be really thankful. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   13:59, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy- Silver Nomination
I think she's ready. I don't know were it mentions her having a creamy pelt though and that was one thing mentioned on the talk page. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:40, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * It looks OK for silver. I will check Sunset for the creamy pelt. Helixtalk 15:17, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
 * The first book we see her in as a kittypet/loner should be the citation source. -- Quailflight 09:32, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Is that Twilight? Or Starlight? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Twilight, I believe. I think in Starlight they only meet Smoky. insane brick'd 14:45, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, cools. They meet her when she is running don't they? With Berry, Mouse and Hazel, who at that time are unkown kits. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  09:26, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

They met her at the Horseplace, but came fleeing to the clans for help. -- Quailflight 05:15, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone planning to finish this up and make the necessary changes? insane brick'd 12:56, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderleg as her former mate needs to be cited ☼Totallytawnypelt99 ☼ Time to celebrate Greenleaf! 16:23, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's somewhere in the first couple books of PO3, I believe? Sky wish  I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 22:31, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

According to Spiderleg's page, it was revealed in Long Shadows. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   01:40, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Chapter 19. I don't know the page number. Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 11:41, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. I'll check right now. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   18:48, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Page 236. I'll add it in. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   18:52, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Added citation. All the needed citations are on the article. I believe she is ready, reference-wise. Moon    flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   18:59, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good. Comments before the vote goes up? insane brick'd 18:05, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Her Starlight section could be expanded. I'll work on that now. Other then that, she looks fine. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:39, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Daisy is ready. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:44, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf - Silver Nomination
She looks ready. → •Maple  fern•  ←  21:13, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf's history could be expanded quite a bit, especially in The Sight. I don't think she's quite ready.

 E c h o  star   13:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone working on this? insane brick'd 12:56, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I can start expanding that. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:57, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded The Sight as much as I could. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:20, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

She looks pretty good now, though her Dark River and Outcast sections could stand to be a tad bit longer... insane brick'd 18:05, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I expanded her Dark River section, but I'm afraid I might have expanded it too much :/ Night  Fall 21:29, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded her Outcast section. Now she looks ready. Echo star  Getting a tan 18:13, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Lionheart - Silver Nomination
I would like to nominate Lionheart's article. It looks OK for silver; his images should be renamed though. Helixtalk 05:09, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The Bluestar's Prophecy section could be expanded dramatically.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:56, June 9, 2010 (UTC)


 * Can someone help with that? I do not have the book. Helixtalk 21:07, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone prepared to help out with this? insane brick'd 12:56, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I have the book, but I haven't finished it yet. I could expand on his apprentice appearences if needed.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 17:18, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I could help but i'm confused on what you want updated. Do you mean all around or something specific? Whitestorm17 01:17, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

He needs some quotes. He has said some pretty monumental stuff and that should be added. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:16, June 27, 2010 (UTC)


 * I will try to add some quotes and expand the Original Series history; depends on my free time, but it will be done. Someone should help out with Bluestar's Prophecy though. Thanks,  Helix talk 20:18, July 1, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'll try, I just got the book back. Echo  star  Getting a tan 18:48, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Just want to add that I filled in his kit appearances for BP last weekend, so it's just anything from when he was made an apprentice onwards left to do. I may help this weekend if someone else hasn't got it by then but I can't promise. -- Sandy star 21:24, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I just finished his Bluestar's Prophecy section; now I think he's ready for silver. Echo star  Getting a tan 23:43, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded his history where it was still needed (especially Into the Wild) and added several quotes. Sorry for being so lazy after proposing it myself... took exactly one month for me to take care of it. Many thanks to Sandy and Echostar for their kind help with the BP section. I reconfirm my nomination for silver.  Helix talk 19:23, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Barkface - Silver Nomination
His article looks ready-- Night s h i n e   R  16:33, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think some parts of his history could be added, I don't think he is quite ready. Also he needs some quotes, I'll find some. Whitestorm17 18:36, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

The sections where all that is said is something like "Barkface is seen at the Moonpool" can probably be expanded. I don't think that he's quite ready.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  13:35, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I meant what Echo said. Whitestorm17 20:52, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Must be expanded. Quailflight 09:14, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

I added more to the Twilight section. We still need more info for Eclipse, Long Shadows, and Sunrise. I'll look for some stuff--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:09, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Is anyone still working on these appearances? insane brick'd 12:29, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'll help Nightshine with the books she mentioned if it hasn't been done already. Echo star  Getting a tan 13:43, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Barkface looks ready for silver. Echo star  Getting a tan 00:02, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge- Silver Nomination
I checked over his article and made sure he wasn't in any of the other books. I think he is ready. Whitestorm17 02:17, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good to me. River star Leader Of StormClan 17:20, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree. All of the sections (other than the ones where he is only mentioned in the allegiances) could be expanded.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  20:43, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good. Comments before the vote? insane brick'd 18:21, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge's page should be expanded as much as possible, because he only has a few major appearances. I don't think it's quite ready for silver. ♦ Echostar  ♦ Happy Fourth! 20:53, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Rippletail- Silver Nomination
With some minor adjustments, Rippletail's article could be silver.  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  23:06, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

The Fourth Apprentice section could be expanded. There might be a few more mentions of him in Fading Echoes--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:15, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

The history could be expanded. ♥Ice shine★  17:01, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'll look into Fading Echoes. My copy of The Fourth Apprentice is being borrowed at the moment, so could someone else look into that?  ♦Echostar♦ Thank StarClan for greenleaf  ☼  12:54, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Since it is his only major appearance, his TFA section should be more detailed. Right now it's general; it only talks about right as the journeying cats get together and then when they fight the beavers. More detail about the journey itself could be added, I'm sure he didn't vanish just for that part :P insane  brick'd 18:21, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ivypaw - Silver Nomination
Hey guys, sorry for being so inactive on this project. Anyways, I looked Ivypaw (TC) over and her article looks pretty good. The history is well expanded and she has some family ciations. What do y'all think? ♥Ice shine★  15:38, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

cite her white paws. •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 15:49, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean white paws? The Fourth Apprentice section could be expanded a bit--  Night s h i n e    ~  16:57, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I added white paws. I'll expand the section in a couple minutes. ♥Ice shine★  16:59, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, expanded as much as possible. ♥Ice shine★  15:49, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

She looks ready to me. Echo star  Getting a tan 13:45, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Me too :) Night  Fall 22:38, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. 雨晶須 五六七 19:27, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Petalfall -- Silver nomination
She looks good and ready for silver. •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 09:52, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. ♥Ice shine★  15:45, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

The text is a bit unclear. "When one of the warriors, Cloudstorm states that they cannot fight them in SkyClan territory" - fight who? It should be stated what battle it is (I don't have the book, unfortunately). Otherwise, the article is good.  Helix talk 14:59, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

I got the info for the article from Cloudstar's page. I don't know who them is. . . ❦✌Mo    us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   17:41, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

I snuck a peek at the book when I went to the mal yesterday, and there was battle against ThunderClan, though I don't know if they could be talking about Twolegs as well. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   21:32, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think she's ready. Echo star  Getting a tan 13:49, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think maybe her history should be expanded a bit, was she mentioned at all after the battle? Night Fall 23:37, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I added a bit more to the end of her history-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:18, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Tanglepaw, Duckpaw, Rushpaw, and Pikepaw- Silver Nomination
With a quick expansion of their articles, these apprentices are ready for silver!  Echo s t a r  ♥    ♥  12:51, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Does anyone agree?? Echo star  Getting a tan 18:11, July 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * I don't have the books, but I checked all four articles and updated as necessary; I support them for silver.  Helix talk 19:16, July 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * They look fine. ♥Ice  shine★  21:54, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, they look ready to me too :) Night  Fall 22:39, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lizardstripe and Mudclaw - Silver Nominations
Their articles looks perfect to me.--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:06, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Lizardstripe seems good, but Mudclaw is only mentioned, but his family is, so I think it would be okay. Quailflight 05:22, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean Quailflight? I agree that the articles look fine. ♥Ice shine★  21:53, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

They look ready for silver to me. Echo star  Getting a tan 13:51, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Poppycloud and Mottlepaw - Silver Nominations
Their articles look good--  Night s h i n e    ~  01:02, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, I see nothing wrong. Quailflight 05:21, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

They look great to me. ♥Ice shine★  16:30, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Poppycloud's article could be expanded a bit. I'll look into it. Echo star  Getting a tan 13:53, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Both are ready for silver. Echo star  Getting a tan 23:52, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Half Moon-Silver Nomination
I was up half the night trying to get her ready for silver xD I expanded the history a lot, but you guys might want to reword a few sentences, I don't know. I added a quote, and the family and description are cited. Night Fall 19:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Her article is great! It looks ready to me--  Night s h i n e    ~  00:41, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Great job, Nightfall! It looks awesome! Echo star  Getting a tan 14:34, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. ♥Ice shine★  16:28, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cherrykit and Molekit (OTS)- Silver Nomination
Both articles seem ready to me. Echo star  Getting a tan 14:32, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

For Cherrykit, I think her fading echoes section could be expanded a bit more. ♥Ice shine★  16:29, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudtail- Gold Nomination
Let's try this again. :) I think he is ready and he is being featured currently, so I think he deserves Gold. Whitestorm17 16:48, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Echo star  Getting a tan 13:54, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting.  Helix talk 07:41, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Can we get another quote? Lightning talk 09:28, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Can I join?
Hi, I was wondering if I could join the project? Cherryfur123 Home + work should never be together! 21:28, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Of course! I'll add you in, and if you have any questions, feel free to ask :) Night  Fall 22:25, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Snake (Character)-Silver Nomination
I edited it a bit, and when he's in a book, he's mentioned so I think he's ready. Sky <font color="Orange">wish <font color="Turquoise"> I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 02:20, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The Secrets of the Clans and A Clan in Need sections could be expanded-- n i g h t  s h i n e  04:40, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine. I'll look into Secrets of the Clans, but I don't have A Clan in Need. Echo star  Getting a tan 19:15, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The Secrets of the Clans section has been expanded. Could someone work on A Clan in Need? Echo star  Getting a tan 19:37, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ashfoot - Silver Nomination
I don't think anything else is needed. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 13:05, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Her Battles of the Clans section could be expanded, but that's all I see. I'll look into it. Echo star  Getting a tan 19:18, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Done. But Ashfoot's blue eyes need to be referenced. It might be in Fire and Ice, but I don't have the book. I'll look at the allegiances page and see if it's there, though. Echo star  Getting a tan 19:56, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Jet: Silver Nomination
I looked at his article, and having only appeared once, I think he's pretty good. -- Sky Storm's brewing... 19:01, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. There's not much more to add. Echo star  Getting a tan 19:20, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Break
Hey everyone, I'm sorry for my prolonged absence. (family, sleep, and another earthquake. That would be #4)

I'm pretty busy, so, my activity will drop a bit. Also, I'm taking a week long break, Because I'm going to many places, so yes, traveling. Thanks for your understanding. Quailflight 06:57, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Stonestream - Silver Nomination
Well? Lightning talk 09:50, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Dove's Wing - Silver Nomination
Looks okay to me. Lightning talk 10:07, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ravenpaw - Silver Nomination
Nothing to be said. Lightning talk 10:27, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Well, he was missing most of his citations so I copied them across from other pages and also used the new format. I've also checked the tenses and links, but I think some of the OS sections could be expanded - perhaps the ones where he was still a part of ThunderClan. -- Sandy star 12:28, July 10, 2010 (UTC)