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Blackclaw (Ki) ~ CBA


Ok, second charart. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:15, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, noticed i forgot the ear pink, i'll fix that. Rain face &lt;3 19:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Add nose-pink, blue the highlights, and make them smaller, make the shading larger, and define it, and blur the shading. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:22, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, is the black supposed to be shading? If so, please lighten it and blur it. It looks like a whole other tone to the fur. The nose should be dark gray, since Blackclaw is a black cat. 19:24, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur, blur and blur some more. Also, did you get the eye color from either the warrior or elder images? It seems a little off. 19:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this one was a TOTAL fail. gonna re-do it so i can make the shading right and... yea. Everything that you guys said. Rain face &lt;3 19:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Crud monkies! forgot to blur. What else will i forget today? Rain face &lt;3 20:06, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blurred it. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 20:55, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better ^-^ Now make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 22:10, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Take the pelt color from one of his other images, this is a bit too light. Looking great though! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 01:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

I looked at it for a REALLY long time (actually, it was only like, 30 seconds :P) and I can't find anything i could complain about. it looks purrfect:PBlue dawn  With Clouds like Shining  eyes... 20:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the nose needs to be darker than the pelt, so it should be almost as dark as the lineart. Also, define the shading and blur the earpink more. 21:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks bluey. '''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 23:01, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur blur and blur more (the shading. Everywhere) 01:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Comments? Rain face &lt;3 02:22, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

You might have to lighten the shading, it looks blacker then it should be. Blend it in with the pelt some more as well. 22:41, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image a bit; right now I can't even tell the lineart from the pelt colour. 22:40 Thu Oct 6

The shading looks weird. Blend it with the highlights. For an example of a black kit, look at Hollyleaf's kit image (remade by me, funnily enough). 19:50, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, my cpu stopped working. I will get started on it. Question, how did you make the chest so bright though? Rain face &lt;3 16:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind. I had to use gimp for it. Re-uploaded. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 19:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and also add some earpink. (Hope it's the right one...) Sky- Trick and Treat 05:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope i got it all. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  12:31, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Rain, this is fabulous! Define the earpink a little. I wish I could do a black cat like this one. 20:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, defined more. Thanks Ivy, though i think that you can do amazing black cats also. *gives a hug so she will feel better* Any way, comments? Rainfacestar Vampire time!  01:20, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I think this still looks completely black. It needs to be lightened a lot and then the shading needs to be darkened. 06:17 Mon Oct 10

Dude, it's not black. It's the dark-gray from the other image. I won't fix it unless someone else argues about it. Rainfacestar Vampire time!  10:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it. It's not completely black, but it's still too dark. 15:28, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you brighten the ear pink just a tad? Not a lot, though. I'm very picky with ear pink.. xD 01:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. 06:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think the changes are showing, i only defined the ear-pink a bit so... yea. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  10:38, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Take the ear pink right from his elder or warrior images. They're not the same. 19:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  18:23, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading/highlights. 22:19, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. 14:55, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  19:29, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and there is a bit of waste on the outside of the neck.  Owl   X   <font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:26, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Think i got it all and blurred the shading. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  00:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The edges of the ear pink come down onto the face. Move them, and the blur the ear pink. 22:28, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *sigh* ear-pink is not my thing, is it? Any way, Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  22:50, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard, I know. Make the ear pink a little more triangular. 22:52, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks for understanding Cloudy. Okay, made it more triangular without it touching the lineart. I really do not like ear-pink any more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  23:33, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looking great so far. Extend the highlights (Or have less shading) on the tail. 19:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the legs is a lot darker then the rest of the shading. I don't think that's supposed to be like that. Make it a tad bit lighter. 21:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, changes aren't showing. They are on the file page, so, look there and Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  22:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Theres waste around the charart get rid of it. 23:32, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! [ 19:39, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more triangular. 20:51, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  00:26, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and the shading between the front legs. 21:29, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, move the earpink into the ear more and blur it.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:40, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. Or smudge the bottom of it into the top of it. 16:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading a little more. 01:00, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Follow the rest of the comments regarding earpink, then make it a little more pink. Lighten it. Leopard claw  Look up  to the past…  13:48, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry for not working on this for a while, i was first at a camp-out (no internet service) and then i was at a sleep-over party last night and i just got back. i am gonna work on this. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  20:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the legs and bottom of the tail looks alot darker than the rest of the shading, could you lighten it or blurr it? . 23:48, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the bottom of the tail. 01:13, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:41, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading. 20:43, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed, and also make the ones on it's sides thinner, they stick out pretty far into the stomach. . 22:02, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights. 23:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Don't really know quite how to explain this, but the head and chest shading look, kinda, akward. 22:35, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a lot. 01:50, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

ACtually you sould redden it. Also You need tomkae the nose a touch bit lighter. Good job! 02:24, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is it really that hard to take a dropper tool and color pick from his elder/warrior image? 02:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail and all the paws. 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy, i was gone for the week and forgot to notify you all so i never got to tell you all. Gosh. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  01:42, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There you go, Rain. Hope it's good for you! 02:24, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Unless the changes aren't showing, I can't really see it. 03:58, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink while you're at it. <span style="">09:35 Mon Oct 31

Well, i tried. Re-uploaded. Comments? Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  20:27, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and darken the nose. 22:13, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, comments? Oh, and thank you atelda for earlier! :) Darkfangstorm  Vampire time!  01:52, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the earpink? DJCandyBud 03:45, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Rain face &lt;3 22:04, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Personally I don't think you should have darkened the ear pink, I can't see it, well just a little anyways. Can you lighten it please? 23:46, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I am going to lose it with the ear-pink. Rain face &lt;3 01:04, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like that all the time xDD. But lighten the shading and redden the ear pink and lighten the nose. This should be ready soon! 02:02, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Cpu being dumb again, i made the ear-pink more like the others and lightened the nose. I think the shading looks fine though, but if i get another complaint about it, i will change it back. Rain face &lt;3 18:30, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, changes aren't showing though. Rain face &lt;3 18:30, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the tail. It's too bright. 05:04, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if these are the changes not showing, but the ear pink doesn't match the other images. It's probably the changes. If someone tells you to change it, don't listen to them, as it needs to match. 05:06, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the earpink a bit? This looks lovely! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  21:20, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay Cloudy and thank you Paley. Rain face &lt;3 21:37, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Umm isnt this declind? If so may I take over? 22:27, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Not necessarily. If the other leads think this is good enough to get approved soon, it stays up. -- 22:28, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and redden it just a biiiiit more, and I think this'll be ready. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Okay, comments? And also, shame on you Sandy. That's not very nice, i am very sensitive and i love how this looks. Rain face &lt;3 16:38, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry but it's over the time limit and this will be declined. I am sorry but I just want to take over! May I? 17:49, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Did splashy not just say that it won't because it will be cba'd soon. Not to be rude but i don't think you will be, i might just put it back up if it does get declined. Rain face &lt;3 17:52, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, images only get declined after a month if they show no signs of major improvement, and this has. It should be CBA'd soon, as I see nothing wrong with it. It took a while, but Rain got it done eventually. 18:42, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I didn't want to be rude I just saw that it was over the limit and it didn't seem like it was ready. No offense... 19:25, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, enough. That was rude, even if you didn't mean it. In fact, Shelly is right. So, CBA? 19:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (Q) ~ For Approval
Finally snagged a queen :P Comments? 19:27, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink a little bit Leaf-storm,19:28,October 15,2011 (UTC)

I'll wait for a second opinion on that, since I used the ear pink color from her images. 19:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least lighting the shading on the belly. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!   Might bite underneath the moonlight  19:34, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the earpink, and blur the shading some more. 19:38, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a little. 23:11, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten all the shading. Add depth to the eye. 23:12, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is a lighter color pixel on the left front paw, blur the shading. <font color="#CC9900"><font face="Elephant"> Owl  <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Elephant"> X   <font color="#CC9933"><font face="Elephant"> G   <font color="#CC6633"><font face="Elephant"> l   <font color="#CC3300"><font face="Elephant"> itt   <font color="#CC3333"><font face="Elephant"> er   <font color="#993300"><font face="Elephant">4LIFE..    The colors of fall 23:35, October 15, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded  12:10, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wind's eyes in her leader charart have a ring of orange in them, which I think makes her stand out in an interesting way. I think you should try to match that. 17:04, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''You'll have to zoom in to see it. 20:31, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The orange was on the outer part, and it was a bold orange... sorry, poking at it. 01:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the ear-pink a tad. 19:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes aren't showing yet 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Why should I blur it more? I think it seems fine. 20:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

No, you will blur the shading more if a more experienced member tells you to. I agree. It needs to have a nice, smooth transition between the lighting planes and blurring it makes this transition looks natural. I know that you're liscensed to have your artistic creativity, but as another fellow artist, I can see that it needs blurred. 21:07, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Even though it seems I didn't blur it, I did. 23:03, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Should I make it more to the color of her ears or just darken it in general? 20:16, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's supposed to be the same as the ear pink.<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 20:17, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes are showing. 21:14, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Making a small bump. 20:05, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The nose is supposed to be the same as the ear-pink, as long as it's not a black cat or anything, which this clearly isn't. Any way, blur and lighten the shading right next to the front arm closes to use. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! [ 20:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading along her back. 20:45, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose color are the same Dark. I took the color from the middle of her ear. And I'll get to it Speckle. 20:55, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok the changes aren't showing. Shading the back is tough D: 21:19, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the tail and blur the shading. 22:31, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Make the pupil skinner. 00:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be some white in the eye as well? 16:29, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll work on this soon. And there is Shadewing. 20:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there is a black square in her eye........Otherwise nice job! <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 23:27, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the shading looks too dark so that parts of the pelt looks brown. Also blur and smudge the ear pink. 00:17, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear oink and define the shading on the tail. 01:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading on this is making me angry ._. I'll live x3. 12:46, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and this will be ready. 22:16, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Safe to say I'm satisfied with the shading for once ^^. 23:01, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

The eye away from us needs a white dot or summin. Otherwise I think it looks good. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 00:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 10:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)'''

Blur the ear-pink. 13:48, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:51, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. <span style="">00:26 Wed Oct 26

Reuploaded -- 11:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot what defien means x_x Sorry for the blonde moment. 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading easier to see. =) 20:45, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:00, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the stomach near the front foot needs to be lightened please. :3 . 22:05, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and face. 10:56, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Blurred it, but it doens't look like it D: -- 12:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It may be me, but I am kind of confused with your light source. You have the lighter shading on this side of the head <--- but on the body, you seem to have the light source coming from directly in front. O.o 22:20, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it a bit larger. 01:53, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did as you said Squirrel. I'm used to shading that way, and I used one of the shading styles to shade it. 19:11, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the belly some more? 00:16, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse ._. 11:12, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur it some more..

However, it looks odd to me because the light source seems to be coming at two angles. I'd say that you should move the light source on the head to our right a little. Someone can correct me if they think it looks fine. 22:20, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, i'm with you atelda, it does look odd. Rain face &lt;3 01:05, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Correct Atelda. Also lighten the shading on the belly and make it somewhat smaller. Great job! 02:05, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to say she's correct again. Rainface already did, it's unnessesary. Blur the belly shading some more. -- 20:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Back now, and did everything else asked :3  12:21, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and brighten it. <span style="">19:54 Sat Nov 5

Also darken the shading and smudge the ear pink alot. !!!!

Tigerstar (Alt.L2) - CBA
Ok, I tried match him correctly but I stopped on the stripes. I made him a bit looking like on the covers..please tell me you dont decline this! Leaf-storm,9:18,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Ah! This is beautiful. Make the earpink less purple. <span style="">10:50 Sun Oct 16

Reuploaded - Leaf-storm,11:08,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Add shading. 13:49, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Would he need scars too? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 13:51, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. At least, I would think so. 14:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded, and that scars and torn ear? Leaf-storm,15:00,October 16,2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes the same color even in the highlights, they look brighter in those places. -- 20:32, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit more brown. Otherwise this is amazing <3. -- 21:19, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the colors don't really match those on the cover, his base pelt is cream in color and his stripes are darker and don't have that much red in them. 22:38, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, the Ear-pink is to bright and neon pink, darken it and make it more natral? :) . 02:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, i cant match everything but I try... Leaf-storm,13:16,October 17,2011 (UTC)

You can color-pick off of the cover (that's what I did for Millie), at the very least, darken the stripes and make them less red colored. I know you try hard and that's not my point. 13:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I take colour from cover.. Im working on it now Leaf-storm,16:34,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Epic FAIL! Leaf-storm,17:04,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Thin out the stripe above his nose. 17:21, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- Leaf-storm,18:29,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink smudges. 19:15, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

yawn* Im sleeping on my keyboard...Whats? I was thinking they're look good..ok reuploaded Leaf-storm,19:27,October 17,2011 (UTC)

Whoah whoah, wha-? We're doing teh manga alts now? - 22:04, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

@BlueOrca: Yep. Haven't you seen Milie's loner and kittypet manga alts up?- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:Navyl">aka Rowantail 23:05, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple and more red and blur all the stripes; make sure they're all the same colour, too. Right now it looks like you forgot to change the colour of a couple stripes (mostly on the tail) <span style="">02:09 Tue Oct 18

reuploaded Leaf-storm,17:38,October 18,2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink. 23:37, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur and smudge the stripes and maybe dark it slightly. Make the ear pink darker and tone it done. Also blur everything 01:37, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't repeat what's already been said. You don't need to say blur twice. >.>;; 01:47, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon, maybe take the color from another approved one. Sand, Bro, would ya quit saying to smudge already? Its doesnt really need to unless its really needed and the stripes are dark enough - 01:52, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

ear-pink, my biggest problem xD Leaf-storm,15:04,October 19,2011 (UTC)

I really like the colors on this it is awsome but yes i agree with the others about ear pink. Ac orn  fur 01:08, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should darken the shading. Nice stripes! 22:37, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm,12:20,October 21,2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink slightly and try to smudge the pelt into the ear pink slightly. Good job! 16:08, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste right outside the bottom of the haunch in front. 16:26, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded, Shadewing, ehm..what? Leaf-storm,17:36,October 22,2011 (UTC)

There's the smallest bit of waste between where the tail begins and the haunch. It's the small corner. 17:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think I not found it... anything changed? Leaf-storm,18:41,October 22,2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink and make sure all the stripes are the proper colour. You missed several on the tail and legs. <span style="">21:31 Sat Oct 22

I would upload a version of it with the waste circled, but I don't think we're allowed anymore. It's right on the bottom, in between the leg and tail. Fill the background in white or neon, and you should see it. 23:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The right ear pink looks blurred into the face. Can you fix that? 01:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded, Its not blurred, Squirrelflame :-) Leaf-storm,8:51,October 23,2011 (UTC)

Fix where the stripes turn yellow (I believe because of highlights) on the tip of the tail, if I am looking at the correct revision. :3 -- 19:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Im blind xD Reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:54,October 25,2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have scars...? Sorry if I'm wrong. -- 21:27, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I add them if the other says yes too Leaf-storm,8:27,October 27,2011 (UTC)

I think he should, it's part of his description. Plus, this is beautiful! . 22:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add scars, and darken the forehead a little please. 22:43, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded Leaf-storm 11:52,October 29,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the scars into the pelt some. -- 21:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the scars a little. They look too pink right now. 00:13, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Leaf-storm 11:48,October 30,2011 (UTC)

Add a small line of red to the middle of each scar to give them depth. <span style="">00:32 Mon Oct 31

Blur the scar above his nose. 10:35, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

reuploaded Leaf-storm 15:42,October 31,2011 (UTC)

Ooh, I like the texture of the scars ^.^ Darken the shading just a tad. -- 20:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded Leaf-storm 20:19,October 31,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear more. 22:21, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

ok,ok reuploaded Leaf-storm 14:49,November 1,2011 (UTC)

Redden the nose pink and the scars if possible. Also darken the scar on the nose bridge, it looks really light. 02:06, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, anything changed now? Leaf-storm 16:44,November 2,2011 (UTC)

The nose pink looks like it doesn't match the ear pink. I thought it was supposed to. 04:58, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

It must? ok sorry Leaf-storm 19:06,November 3,2011 (UTC)

Blur the smaller scar on the tail. 20:57, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Leaf-storm 13:05,November 4,2011 (UTC)

Most of these comments lately have been about the scars and I think it looks fine. CBA? 00:04, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but why are the eyes green? I just assumed up till this point it was like that on the manga, but I saw the cover today, and his eyes don't look green, they look pale amber like they're supposed to be. Can you fix them? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:36, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

They looked like green to me Leaf-storm 9:54,November 5,2011 (UTC)

Oh, they ARE green on the first book. I was looking at the third one, where they're not green, sorry. XD I guess he should have green eyes on here then. Reinstating CBA. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:06, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) ~ Declined
I hope this doesn't get declined. Anyways, I think Dappletail gets a queen image, according to the new rule. 00:07, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Good job! But blur the striped a bit more, define the earpink and lighten the shading just a tad on the white.
 * cries of the awesome beauty* The stripes need to be more orangy though. xD<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stealing all ur <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> candy 00:10, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:27, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose look less whiteish, more pink. :) 00:31, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

You're right, she gets one under the new rule as she was mentioned with kits. Her earpink should be the same color as on the other chararts, though. 00:42, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. :) Blur the stripes more, lighten the earpink a tad. Wuahahaha! <font color="orange" style="background:black;"> Yup. I've been working on my evil laugh. &gt;:D  00:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse. 01:13, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Erase or thin out a few lines so they match the original image. <span style="">02:05 Tue Oct 18

I agree with Wildheart, the lines look too thick. . 03:56, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

When you fix the lines, blur them more too. -- 20:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blur, blur, and blur. -- 22:34, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the lines more. -- 10:57, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink. 20:31, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a front white paw?

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  20:50, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh derp, yeah. I erased it while I was fixing the stripes. And Speckle, I don't think I should. It's from the other images. -- 21:23, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the era pink. 21:42, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I also agree that the earpink should be made more visible. The tail needs some highlights as well. It looks really nice!! 22:49, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back paws, please. :3 -- 04:19, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so lazy :P -- 20:12, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paws, and she needs a front left white paw. 20:47, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Xcf. files changed my skills :P -- 20:58, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Try to separate the stripes more because they look to...close together. Also smudge the stripes and ear pink. Also darken the ear pink the slightest bit. 23:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

You need to lighten the ear pink, not darken it. Take it right from her elder image. 03:14, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the stripes and the earpink. -- 12:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's stripes going out, erase those. xD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="black" >Sky- Stop right there criminal <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="Orange"> scum! 12:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

After you erase the waste, blur the stripes more.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  12:41, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Derp. -- 12:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Define the earpink. 16:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the stripes a tad and make them more orange so they match her elder image. <span style="">19:09 Sat Oct 22

Her stripes kind of look like they are fading from left to right. Also, are there stripes on the legs? If not, add them. 23:32, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a tad. 01:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. -- 20:31, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes. <span style="">00:13 Mon Oct 24

Reuploaded I redid it. -- 12:07, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The paw i belive is supposed to be white and make it slightly longer and blur it too. 00:42, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her white paw.

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded HUZZAH! -- 12:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. This is doing good though. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:49, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Don't think I should Rain, I took her earpink color from her elder image. 11:45, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I may be wrong, but shouldn't the stripes be defined a bit? . 22:08, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think your looking at the wrong image... I can see the stripes clearly. -- 22:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. Excellent job :) CBA? 20:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Could you saturate the stripes a bit more so they match the elder image better? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:23, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as if there is a big blob of brown near her shoulder.. Could you fix that??

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Spread the stripes out and make them more uneven to match her other images. 12:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made it worse D: -- 15:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

No you didn't. Join up some of the stripes, and look at the stripes on her other images. They get thicker and thinner and some bits are brighter than others. Try to replicate that. 19:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter. Also, possibly lighten the shading on the haunch? 00:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading along the face, neck and shoulders. -- 20:14, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading DJCandyBud 03:50, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. 23:49, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Good. The nose pink is much to bright. Tone it done and redden it. Also make the paw white, because part of it is gray 02:09, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's not gray, it's shaded. Just lighten the shading a little. -- 20:27, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Try making the dapples just a bit brighter. Also, the white on her elder image doesn't reach her muzzle: that's just gray that came with age. The white ends on her chest. 18:46, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Not to be rude but are you still working on this? 22:48, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Sorry Snow, but it's been a week. =( 03:00, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar Alt. (D) ~ For Approval
Okay, so, I do realize the shading looks stiff and un-blurred, but i've blurred it to the max on GIMP. Also, The tawny reference is from Oakhearts tawny color, and i've posted a cite on Leopardstar's page already. Comments? :S. 01:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Rename the file Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png and put delete tags on the other images you uploaded. Add some shading under the jaw and brighten the earpink. <span style="">01:10 Tue Oct 18

How do I add an image when it's in source mode? :S. 01:18, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

On the bar (where you would get your signature) press the button that looks like a picture fame, and then put the name of the file into the part where it says: "Example.jpg". ^-^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay...Reuploaded Thanks. . 01:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

nooo, name it Leopardstar.deputy.alt.png(its case sensative) :|- 01:52, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oi. That was....way too much work. It shouldn't have been like that. xD. 02:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

xD Redden the earpink as it almost blends in with the pelt. Maybe blur the edges of the shading, but otherwise this looks great! 02:19, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Again, way too much work. xD Anyway, fixing the charart itself was pretty easy. And BlueOrca, it should have been Leopardstar.deputy.alt2 becuase it just made another file of the first alt. :3 Reuploaded.. 02:43, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 18:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the head a bit. 20:11, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I think it reuploaded.. 00:40, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur shading. 00:56, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading? You should also define the shading on the tail and make the earpink smaller. 22:51, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Define the earpink. 12:20, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Good. Lighten the shading and also smudge the ear pink and shading too. 16:09, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Omg this is so pretty! Just lighten the shading.

Lighten the ear pink a little. 01:18, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Erm...I accidentially closed the tab and lost all my layers, i'm working on re-doing it. . 06:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Feather, you still working on this? I know you're redoing it and all, but you still only have 7 days, and you've taken 8 since your last reupload. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my gosh! I forgot all about this! I feel so ashamed now, Give me a moment and I'll have the new one up. . 22:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. There. Nobody has any idea how much I love this aside from the earpink. xD. 00:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. Hmm... This is interesting. I like it, Feather! 01:08, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Errmm..? Is this thing working? xD Re-uploaded. And Thanks Skye. :D. 01:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Beautiful! 10:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Thanks! Re-uploaded. 19:05, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The face highlights is much too light. Also where is your light source? It just looks randomly placed. O.o 02:26, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

That face highlight isn't a face highlight, it's a face face, like any other realistic cat. and I used the shading spots everyone else uses. . 03:13, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous Feather! Could you darken the shading a bit though? And the face DOES look a bit lighter than the rest of the image, but I'm not sure if that's on purpose or not. If not, could you make it the same darkness as the rest of the pelt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:26, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It is supose to be paler on the face. If you look, it's on the front paws too. And it's also suppose to be on the chest and bottom of the tail. Re-uploaded! :D. 06:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a lot and make it a little less purplish. 00:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely. I think the earpink colour is fine; however, it could be smaller. Add some shading on the muzzle or add some mottles so that it looks less bare. <span style="">05:47 Sun Oct 30

^Thanks! And there we go...although as for the muzzle, I darkened it up with some shading, and I just think it looks kind of weird now. :3 . 13:24, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the mottles. 22:22, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the face highlights and the ear. Also lighten the shading too. 02:11, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I actually think the shading needs to be DARKENED not lightened, and not everyone uses highlights Sandstorm. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh. I need to Withdraw this, this is the second time i've lost all the layers, and I don't have time to re-do it every time. :( . 22:03, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Very well then, Feathermoon. Anyone who wants to can take over. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:19, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over since Jag just got archived. Sorry to hear you can't do this anymore :( 22:59, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

My goodness Ivy, this is GORGEOUS! The only thing I can find wrong is, can you define the earpink bit? I seriously don't see anything else wrong with this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:09, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely stunning! Just extend the shoulder highlight upwards if you use highlights and if not just thin out the neck shading. 11:36, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt. Q) ~ For Approval
*shivers in disgust* This is disgusting :S she looks like a chipmunk with a nut in its mouth :| my least fave charart i've ever made. 15:21, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the ones like in my image. 15:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patch on the far side of her face needs to extend all the way to the end. Make the stripes on her face go up and down and define them. You smudged the lineart on top of where her arms are. Add more stripes to her patches. 15:24, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

OK how do I make the stripes match teh other image and where is the smudged lineart. Would you mind showing me I don't see it. Also I'm trying to match them so the only place I see that needs more stripes is teh haunch. And seriously does she not look like a chipmunk with a nut in her mouth? LOL REUPLOADED 15:31, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 15:36, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED hehehe this is so creepy... 15:43, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the haunch more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time!  18:56, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the patches and make the stripes match on all of the patches. 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Seperate the patches on her back. Look at her background picture on The Rescue and you can see they are seperated, plus if you have the book she's seen laying down frequently, so you can use that for help as well. The patches on her face wouldn't come down so far. Again, looking at how she looks in the manga should help, if you don't have it look at Harper Collins Browse Inside, it's free and I believe the first page she is on she is shown laying down. 23:07, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I like this MUCH better now. REUPLOADED. She's growing on me :) 11:36, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes still look a little off. If you need help, ask Stoneclaw. She may be able to give you advice on how to make the stripes like hers. 14:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might have smudged/blurred the nose because it looks huge xD 15:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The whole face lineart looks funny. Could you paste a new lineart over it? I could do it if you need help. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:42, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 21:05, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Could you help me Paleh? 11:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patch on the belly/chest area too. 21:32, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded - Kay, fixed all the lineart. :) Had to redo the eyes, but I tried not to touch anything else. If you need help with anything else, fell free to ask. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Try to fix the stripes.. They look irreuglar, since they are a bit too thick. Try to match the ones on Stoneclaws image ^-^

Gh ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  01:43, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the back paw and darken the shading a touch. 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading specifically on the cream and blur the tail stripes. 20:16, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, add either a highlight or shading on the haunch, and blur the place where brown meets crem on the back left leg. 23:52, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular as well. 10:34, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the overall shading and define the highlights if there are any. DJCandyBud 03:55, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED O_O moooo 13:08, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match her alt leader more 00:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, um. If I did it wouldn't match, er the manga. And that SERIOUSLY bothers me...if I have people seconding this I guess i'll hafta live with it but can you explain how to make them match cuz I had trouble before and that's why I switched them to match the manga in the first place. 11:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

They need to match Stoneclaw's version, not the manga. We're not allowed to copy the exact pelt style of a character from the Warriors books because those images are copyrighted. If you're that confused, then ask Stoneclaw for help, as she's the one who made the leader image. The two cannot be different. 18:16, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

LOL I was just about to reupload it XD anyways REUPLOADED  18:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and smoothen the stripes. 20:26, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, more pink, and blur it. 20:54, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink is triangular, and I will not make it more pink because I copied it from the leader alt. And if I blur it any more than it is it'll blur the lineart. I'll do the stripes later. 11:29, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the ones on my image, and the earpink is not the same. 17:54, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe working from the comic instead of the alt leader image would help? Just a suggestion That way you could see her stripe pattern from different angles. 18:51, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and I also agree with Shellheart. 22:49, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, she can't use the one from the "manga", because the stripes aren't the same. We're not supposed to match the designs 100%, because those images are copyrighted from HarperCollins. It also says that in the guidelines. 02:59, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt.K) ~ For approval
Comments? . 20:52, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, 21:09, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripe a little? I can barley see them, not a whole lot just a little. 21:15, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Bur the earpink a little bit. 21:19, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we decided quite a few times that he wasn't gonna get an alt for being called ginger? Unless this is an alt for something that I missed/isn't on his page? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:53, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think this is for being ginger, but I don't think it should be declined, since ginger is different from golden brown. Ginger is Firestar-color, and golden brown is...Thornclaw-color. They're completely different. Since cats get alts for simply having minor changes like white paws, then there's no reason to decline this. 21:57, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:26, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail tip a little bit. This looks really good Squirrel. 15:41, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Sweet! :) 23:56, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make this more ginger. Right now it definitely looks more like golden-brown than ginger. <span style="">22:56 Wed Nov 2

Re-uploaded. 23:57, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

still needs to be more ginger 00:55, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you redden the earpink a bit? Maybe make it more like his warrior and apprentice? 20:52, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. 00:08, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks kind of light, but that could just be me though. 00:02, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:05, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make this more ginger-y. <span style="">19:57 Sat Nov 5

Can you give me a hex code? 20:24, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and the stripes. You can hardly see them. Great job! 22:51, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to redo the whole image; just take and put it in a new layer and then adjust the opacity so that it makes the image seem more ginger. I learned that trick from Ivystripe :3 <span style="">22:55 Sat Nov 5

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Wildheart! 23:48, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Alt.Q) - For Approval
Well, if Whispering Breeze got an alt. for being described as a tabby, Willowbreeze should get an alt for being described as a solid cat. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:25, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad, especially in the areas it would be darker, such as under her chin, her belly, and her tail? 01:31, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:08, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but can you blur the shading some? 21:45, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. Rain face &lt;3 23:24, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading next to her hind leg? <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:23, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Center the ear pink and redden it. Isn't the nose supposed to be pink? 20:47, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

No. If it's a gray cat, their nose should be a darker version of the pelt color. 20:48, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the delay. Life's been kicking my butt lately... - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:21, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlight on her front left leg. 15:22, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:02, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Was she actually called solid gray, or just gray? <span style="">19:59 Sat Nov 5

It was in the manga, she was SOLID gray. I checked too, since it seemed unlikely that they said she was solid gray in the book. XD Could you blur the shading more? This is lovely! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  22:43, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Beatiful! Some of your best work! But you need to darken the ear pink and center it. It's too high in the ear. 22:52, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redstar (Alt. L) - For Approval
Ginger and bracken are two different colours, so comments? 02:22, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! You reserved it just before I was going to! Anyways, blur the tail-tip and brighten the shading, or is it highlight? I'm not to good at this, the white circles. 10:32, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink, it's a bit bright. This is really good! 19:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

On his page, it doesn't say where he was described as bracken-colored. 00:05, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Now it does. :P Also, I liked the shading settle, but I brightened it. 01:14, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight just a tad. 20:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. 01:26, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge/move the chest highlight to his right a tad. 09:07, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:25, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make him a bit less green. 01:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenheart (Lo) ~ CBA
Tell me if I'm wrong, but if Spiderstar gets a loner image so should Brackenheart. Comments? 17:32, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more and blur the tail highlights. (If any)  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  19:48, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading everywhere except his legs. 20:03, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:26, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure. Techincally, Spiderstar and Brackenheart never left the Clan, chosing to spend the rest of their days in the gorge with the elders. They were still part of a group, would they be loners? 20:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

There's a discussion on the talk page about it, go have your say. 20:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well if he stil gets one, brighten the earpink. 20:45, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:14, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

This looks really good. Blur the shading on his left back leg. Rain face &lt;3 23:21, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and the ear pink. Blur the legs too. 01:26, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

^_^ I think the stripes are fine, but feel free to contradict me if I'm wrong. Also, I think the earpink is fine. Add depth to the eye, please. Very nice. 02:58, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't it artist's choice? 19:05, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded I darkened the stripes, but the ear-pink matches his MC image. Sandstorm: I assume you meant to blur the shading. 20:23, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a little bit more so it matches the MC image. <span style="">23:17 Thu Nov 3

Re-uploaded 13:02, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! CBA? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:42, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ CBA
Comments? Changes can be seen here if they don't show on the page. 20:01, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

wait is this not mine anymore? <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:21, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Scarlet declined it. *hands up* I did nothing but claim it. 20:25, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is beautiful Skye, darken the shading. 20:27, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:30, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

oh okay! thanx for telling me...and make the earpink not touch the outer parts of the ear =) <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:38, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't touch the outer parts of the ear, but if you'd like, I'll make it smaller. 20:41, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

oh sorry.....and yeah it looks a little big..<font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">Star <font color="White" face="Julee" style="background:Black">shine <font color="Silver">☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:43, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 20:45, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Could you darken/add neck shading though? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:50, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I thought neck shading wasn't mandatory. . . I don't add it any other time... 23:16, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I always use neck shading, but you don't have to. Define the shading on the tail. 00:17, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:23, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely job. Comments before approval? <span style="">20:00 Sat Nov 5

Oakheart (Alt.W2) ~ For approval
Comments? If Pinestar gets a fox-colored alt, then so does he. I got all the colors from Pinestar, including earpink, so I'm not changing those. 23:10, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well if he's supposed to get an alt for being called "fox-coloured", his pelt should be ginger. <span style="">23:13 Thu Nov 3

Blur the ear pink. 23:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I just changed the red scale thing to redden it. 23:20, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I redid it; the red scaled version looked too red. 23:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

This just looks like a tabby version of his normal image though. Barely any difference. And he wasn't even mentioned with stripes, those are just being added because this is supposedly a form of ginger. And I'm pretty sure his normal charart is pretty close to fox-color. I don't think this should get an alternate, but that's just me. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:45, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

If Oakheart is "reddish-brown" then, yes, fox-coloured is pretty much the same. I agree, this shouldn't get an alt. 19:03, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

There really is not much of a difference So I belive this will be declined. 22:55, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Talon Alt. (CG) ~ For Approval
Well, he was described like this in Cats of the Clans, so here he is.. I am strangely attracted to alternates.. ._. Fail tabby/Cave Guard xD  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  02:33, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps thicken the tabby markings (optional) and I'd smudge the mud in all directions. Also, blur where the white meets with the light brown and perhaps make it whiter... Awesome! 02:39, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have a white chest? Cause this seems to be going off into his shoulder. xD (Correct me if wrong. )<font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="blue" >Sky- VoldemortxMcGonagall <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="cyan"> ftw! 02:42, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Made the heading say 'for approval'. Blur the lighter chest a little more, and there is a bunch of waste between the two front paws. Good job! 15:41, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's actually a lot of waste all over the image. 18:52, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah, I was doing this really quickly, so that's why its all messed up. xD Hopefully I got rid of all the waste, made the chest more white (shading caused it to go tannish xD), blurred the mud and the whites going off his shoulder?? Shoot.. Dx Oh, and changes are not showing...  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  19:32, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... he has a white chest. Your white only covers less than half of his chest. Look at a leader image with a white chest or something. It goes down to the middle of where their front legs meet. 19:35, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the muzzle counts as the chest, correct me if I'm wrong, because it's white too. 23:57, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

In Cats of the Clan, he is shown with a white muzzle. I added it to his trivia on his page btw. ;) 00:06, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded There, is that any good? :3  Gh  ou  lp  eb  bl  e! '''Trick? Or Treat?'''  00:13, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks Atelda! And smudge/blur the mud a bit more. 00:37, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tiny bit, and do as Sweetflower suggested. This is neat! 00:53, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened and blurred the mud. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   01:16, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a tad. I can barley see it. 16:29, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the white and blur it. <span style="">20:06 Sat Nov 5

Reuploaded Brightened the earpink and fixed the chest. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:49, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I still think the white on the chest needs to be extanded and slightly darken the shading if you will. 22:56, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Also lighten the white a lot and smudge the mud. <span style="">23:01 Sat Nov 5

Try and match the picture in CotC better, make the stripes fainter on the back, add a dark tail tip, and add a white part around his eyes. Here's a ref if you don't already have one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:50, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Alt.D) ~ For Approval
Okay, this is based on his image in Cats of the Clans. I knew this cat was him and not Leafstar as the other cat image that could have been him (the cat on the top) matched the image of Leafstar on the cover of SkyClan's Destiny. I tried to match the image the best I could, which wasn't easy considering the fact that all I had to work with was a disembodied head and chest. XD Comments? 19:47, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

...this isn't even fair. How can you make such an amazing charart? Erase the stray pixel above his ear and define the earpink a tad. I adore this. <span style="">20:05 Sat Nov 5


 * O *hugs* It is mine now. >.< Its awesome! Lighten the shading a bit. ;3 M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:47, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you can't have three images up at once. You'll need to either withdraw one of your tweaks or withdraw this. Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:55, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, it's all good. I withdraw Whitestorm. 00:34, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Kay. :) Could you add/define the earpink a ton, I can't tell if it's there or not. Though it might just be my computer, the colors are kinda acting funky on it today. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:36, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, I tried. I used the colors from the image, but I think I've defined it a bit. I don't want to deviate too much. 00:49, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Why? My Sunfish charart buddy does so much better with charart's then me :( Any way, the stray pixel is still there. Rain  face &lt;3 01:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainy, you're fine. You'll get it with practice. 01:13, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think should be made using the warrior lineart. If you didn't notice, the name in the book said Leafdapple and note Leafstar. Sharpclaw couldn't be deputy if Leafstar still went by the name Leafdapple. 02:56, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, do I have to? I used the deputy lineart because I was looking at the image from the Warrior's App, which called her Leafstar. TT.TT 03:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was going straight from the book. Since you mentioned it was in the Warriors app, I think it could be made for BOTH ranks... 03:05, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was about to mention that, actually. Yeah, I agree. 03:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

In the meantime, dull the ear pink a bit. It's too bright. 03:08, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled it up. Please, no more ear-pink comments. This is the first time in a while that I've been happy with it. 03:18, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (Alt.D) ~ For Approval
I really hate the shading and the ear pink. >_< Comments? 20:33, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the ear pink tons. Make the ear pink smaller and center it as well. 20:38, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I knew that would happen. But I still dont like it and I blured over it a bunch... 22:12, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink color less neon/bright. Dull it. 22:32, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tryed to dullen it but I ended up darkening it....I had now idea how do dull it to be truthful... 22:44, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Give the eye some depth, not just one flat color. Blur the shading more, add some between the foreleg and haunch, and have less on the tail. 22:46, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 22:57, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I thought the shading was funny. And I did my best with the depth. Looks better now! 23:02, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. <span style="">23:03 Sat Nov 5

Blur the shading a lot and thicken it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:42, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs major blurring, fix that. 00:07, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading for you. Anyway, redo the shading so it conforms to the contours of his body and add depth to his eye, maybe change the color to match that image, which is where the alt came from. You might want to tone down you highlights, too. 01:00, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did the hole thing and I added the depth as much as I could. Comments? 01:43, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. 03:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blured and blured but it doesn't look to different. Sorry you guys... 03:17, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Spiderstar (Lo) ~ For Approval
Special thanks to Oblivion for helping when I was completly desperate! Anyways, comments? 01:40, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

You need to blur the stripes xD I sent it to you just after I had finished in Paint so you could blur them yourself. 01:41, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the shading/highlights. Also blurred stripes. 01:56, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights go in the proper place, since it looks like a big blotch of light in the middle. Also tone down the earpink, its too bright/hot pinkish it. Love the stripes! M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   02:06, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

And fix the miscolored lineart. Also make the eyes look right. (see the apprentice tutorial for how they're supposed to look) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  02:08, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

She can do the eyes any way she wants. It's how I did my eyes, and no one said anything about that. There's no specific guidelines for eyes. 02:10, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the background transparent. 02:54, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

But highlights in other places and make the ear pink much smaller. Don't let it take up the whole ear. Also redden it or darken it. Thicken some stripes and lighten the tail. Great! 03:20, November 6, 2011 (UTC)