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Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here.

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail?

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail?

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean.

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match?

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional.  16:01 Sat Feb 6 

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps.  10:53 Sun Feb 7 

Hawkpaw (SC) (A) - CBA
so comments? I know the ear pink looks a little bad. 16:42, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, as I can't see any at all.

Re-Upps— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:58, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

The shading still really needs to be darkened. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:00, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the ear pink 17:36, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

I see some waste. 18:47, January 26, 2016 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes more yellow? They look amber to me, but feel free to disregard this if they're not.

Re-Upps— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 14:52, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the shading needs to be darkened a lot more, I can't see it at all. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:11, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

This is going to sound really annoying, but I really cannot see the shading well, and in the areas where I can, it is very hard-edged. I have looked on multiple screens, and consistently cannot clearly see the shading. Darken the shading a lot and blur/smudge/whatever it. I'm sorry if this came off as rude, that was not my intention at all. 18:48 Wed Jan 27

Can I suggest you lighten the base slightly it will help the shading stand out. 22:14, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps that's as light as I can go or it''ll look like a regular gray.— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 18:15, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks black to me and I think it is possible for you to lighten it more but I don't know. 20:15, January 28, 2016 (UTC)

I'll upload soon.— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:08, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

The shading needs to be darkened and smoothed out a bit. 22:25, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink seems a tad bit too neon, although that might just be me. 00:42, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

will upload tomorrow.— Minkclaw Never stop believing. 23:39, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Could you blur the earpink a little more and add depth to the shading? <span style="">15:17 Wed Feb 3

Still working?

Yes— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:12, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has gone over one week without uploads, so I'd need to decline it anyways due to PCA's guidelines, which are clearly stated at the top of the page.

I'll take over. <span style="">16:29, 02/5/2016

Reuploaded <span style="">17:09, 02/5/2016

he looks a bit blue. 23:02, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Whoops, didn't realize it was /that/ blue <span style="">23:20, 02/6/2016

Comments before approval? 19:13, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Rileypaw (Kit) - For Approval
Right let's try this again... I will make him short haired and add a coller if need. 16:59, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base coat, as well as thin out the stripes and add more? You have to match Snowdapple's apprentice image, I don't know if you've seen.  <span style="">17:05 Wed Jan 27 

darken the tail shading as well I can barely see it— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 17:06, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Youll need to add a collar since he was a kittypet. Also do you need my file? 18:16, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Does he need a collar? I am having trouble putting a collar on a long haired blank. 18:37, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

You can borrow the collar lineart from Stormcloud's kit image if you like. I can send you an image with just the lineart if you want.  <span style="">18:42 Wed Jan 27 

Also technically wouldnt you need to wait until blossompaw was archived before posting this? 19:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't think they would, since it was mistakenly reserved/posted, and the other artist came forward to claim it? Not sure in this situation though. Sorry I don't have anything constructive to say on the art, but it's all been said. <span style="">19:17, 01/27/2016

That would be great Shinx and actually Snowdapple would it be possible for me to get that file. I want to re do him 20:10, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hope this helps :)  <span style="">20:21 Wed Jan 27 

Reupload fixed collar and stripes. 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the base to match the apprentice? <span style="">21:13, 01/27/2016

Um it's the same I colour picked? 21:40, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

It looks much darker. Either define the light, or make sure you didn't colorpick from a shaded part. Define the shading depth too.  <span style="">21:42 Wed Jan 27 

Reupload defined shading and lightened 21:51, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Hey shinx could you do me a flavor and give velvet the file? Im out of town rn 22:12, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Sure thing buddy- Velvet, do you have an e-mail or something I can send it to?  <span style="">22:20 Wed Jan 27 

Yeah sure it's Leia.clark@gmail.com 22:21, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened base 23:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Remove the collar. It is not said anywhere in Ravenpaw's Farewell that Riley had a collar, and it's an assumption to say that he did have one.

I will remove it only if more people say 11:57, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

It's an assumption to have the collar, Velvet. Assumptions are not allowed on character pixels, so you have to remove it. It doesn't matter if people disagree; if there's no mention of a collar (which there is not), then he doesn't get one. Simple as that.

Remove the collar. Also make both ears dark gray, as seen on the loner image 14:38, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload there is no need to get angry. I just did want to remove the collar only to be told to put it back on. Any way removed it and my kit always had grey ears. 18:26, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading. 22:19, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload defined shading 09:23, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the parts that aren't darker, such as the legs and head, neck, etc. Also, is there texture on this? I can't make it out, since mine does have texture. There are also pale parts that need to be on the muzzle, neck, chest, underbelly, and paws. Did you get the file from Shinx? 13:59, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I played around with the texture slightly but if I add too much it looks messie. Also lightened paws but were they really ment to be paler I never knew. 17:36, January 31, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading.

The shading is getting a little too flat, could you define the light? 04:23, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened him, he looks like a wee white tiger. 08:12, February 1, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add a little more shading around the edges? The shading depth could be defined a little, and it appears it might be leaking just a tad. Also, define the shading on <-- leg and the tail. 02:49, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload difined shading 16:27, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the texture, please. <span style="">15:18 Wed Feb 3

Reupload I am having so much bother with this texture! 18:35, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Can you define the pale parts? 20:19, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reupload  lightened pale parts 21:15, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten the shading need. 01:03, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I meant more, sorry. 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload lightened shading 14:52, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

This is actually starting to get a bit too bright in comparison to the apprentice image. Dull down the overall pelt color, and define the pale muzzle, chest, underbelly, and paws please. 23:41, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload I'm starting to hate this pale, muzzle underbelly and paws! 09:46, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

There's waste by his right ear.

Reupload thanks fixed that waste 13:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Patch (RF) (KP) - CBA
Will tweak the pattern after I finish my assignments. BCPrincess, I adore this design^.^ <span style="">13:45 Tue Feb 2

Smudge the markings more? <span style="">3:45 Wed Feb 3

I think the markings match fine. 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

A little bit of smudging wouldn't hurt. Princess' markings on her image are a bit softer than on this one.

Reuploaded <span style="">01:24 Thu Feb 4

Could you smooth out the shading on the back leg a bit? Beautiful work ^^ <span style="">00:54 Sat Feb 6

And the back and face.

I am having computer trouble. I will hopefully be able to update this but I'm not sure if I will still have the file after I manage to fix whatever is going on. Just a warning. <span style="">14:54 Sat Feb 6

Reuploaded Okay, I got the issue resolved without having to completely wipe my computer, which is surprising. I smoothed the shading out as much as I could without losing the look I wanted it to have. <span style="">18:01 Sun Feb 7

Comments before approval? 19:14, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Pasha (KP) - For Approval
probably gonna redo this later. i was in a hurry. <span style="">21:48 Tue Feb 2

Could you maybe lighten the base slightly so we can see the shading? 22:19, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base is fine, as the description does state very clearly "almost black" but could you define facial shading just a smidge? 03:23, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This could be my screen but he looks too dark to be "almost black". Perhaps a darkness like Crowfeather would do.

Define the shading depth? <span style="">15:19 Wed Feb 3

I think the darkness is fine but can you add some more eye ddepth? Unless it's there and I can't see it. 19:53, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

I think the base could be lightened a little bit- she was supposed to be almost black, and this looks black. Crowfeather's shade would work wonderfully for this, I think. I also think the shading could be darkened a bit too.

can you make him more brown too. 15:22, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. Some said Crowfeather and Skt said brown so I tried to split the difference <span style="">00:53 Sat Feb 6

Why would he need to be brown? He was never described as "dark brown, nearly black" W~

The collar looks flat. Define the shading on it please.

He's not specified as dark grey or dark ginger or anything, so the default would be brown, correct?  <span style="">11:37 Sat Feb 6 

yes, it would be. :T 11:46, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

Bellapaw (Lo) ~ For Approval
I tried to match Berry's apprentice while Rileypaw was on CBA, but I couldn't ;_; So instead have a classic tabby  <span style="">19:15 Fri Feb 5 

Maybe you could make her colors more like Firestar's? She is said to look exactly like him after all. 22:01, February 5, 2016 (UTC)

I've been playing around for a little while and honestly I can't ake the colors any more like Firestar's whilst still matching the pale orange description. I even colorpicked and just made the colors lighter- it still doesn't like anything like Firestar. Unless you can give me a color that's both pale orange //and// looks like Firestar..?  <span style="">23:35 Fri Feb 5 

Mind if I play around with a new pattern/colors on the apprentice and see if I can get it to look more like Firestar but still light? If not, that's totally fine, I'll match this. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 05:49, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

I'd much rather keep the pattern like this if possible (I'm really proud of it) but mess with the color all you like. Would you like the file?  <span style="">11:08 Sat Feb 6 

Larkwing (FQ) (MC) ~ For Approval
01:07, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail.

reuploaded just redid the shading entirely 16:42, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the ear-pink a touch scarly likey   05:23, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded ^^ 05:34, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Barkface (MC) - For Approval
bork bork <span style="">01:26, 02/7/2016

Could you shorten the tail just a little bit more? Maybe... by no more than six pixels, if that? Seems a bit too long as it is.

Aww, so cute <3 Could you blend the shading break on the chest a little? <span style="">03:02 Sun Feb 7

Reuploaded thank <span style="">18:41, 02/8/2016

Define the light on the chest 22:13, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just sharpened the spot that I blurred earlier, since that's all I could do. <span style="">22:18, 02/8/2016

Icewhisker (MC) - For Approval
This looked better in gimp. :/ 01:37, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading and eye depth.

Re-uploaded: :/ 19:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading? <span style="">19:52 Sun Feb 7

Define the light on the legs, actually, and expand and define shading everywhere else. The herbs also look pretty neon, perhaps saturate them a little more? <span style="">18:29, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: 18:45, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

smudge the earpink 21:09, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes 22:12, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? It doesn't look any different from before, they still look fully covered in shading <span style="">22:50, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: THe earpink was already smudged before but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 23:23, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think since your source is coming from the top left, the shading on the legs and tail would be switched to the other side. 00:39, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Theres some shading leaking on the back leg. Define the light on the legs and theres also some shading from the tail leaking onto the cheek. 18:54, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Leafpool (MC) - For Approval
Also looked better in gimp. 01:59, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Please smudge the stripes with a hard edged brush instead of blurring them, as they're smudged on her other images. Also, the shading needs to be defined and its leaking in some places. Also, the paws look gray. The ear pink is also very hard edged.

Could you define your light source? The tail shading says it's the right, but rest of the image says the left. Also, define the light on the raised front leg.  <span style="">10:50 Sun Feb 7 

Re-uploaded: <_< 18:56, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Why the "<_<"? It's not like I and Shinx were being rude or anything, I was just asking you to fix something on your image. And define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us.

Re-uploaded: It's directed towards my image, Fox. Not you or Shinx. 01:59, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading ? She looks a bit flat <span style="">18:21, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded: I can't expand this anymore. This as much as it'll get before it looks like the entire image is in shading. 18:44, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I think she has a stripe down her back and tail? 22:25, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Couch you blur the shading a bit more on the tum? Also define the shading on the raised paw <span style="">22:44, 02/8/2016

About the stripe, is it visible on this blank? I'm not sure, that's why I didn't include it. 23:22, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Please kill me. 05:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) ~ For Approval
hmm 02:44, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Mmaybe sharpen the shading on the back legs? Also doesn't the entire cheek need shading? 01:59, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

With this light source, no, the whole cheek doesn't need shading. I'd add some to the chest though <span style="">22:41, 02/8/2016

Oatspeckle (MC) ~ For Approval


Define the shading on all her legs. 18:27, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a touch more and maybe blur the shading around her elbow 05:25, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Spottedleaf (MC) ~ For Approval
Oh my god this pattern. I noticed the waste after I uploaded, I'll get it next upload.  <span style="">02:46 Sun Feb 7 

There's waste at the base of her tail.

.... Not trying to be rude, but I already said I saw it.  <span style="">14:36 Sun Feb 7 

reups made a few tweaks  <span style="">16:43 Mon Feb 8 

Blur the shading on her lifted paw, it looks like she has gray toes :P 05:26, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Expand/define the shading on the chest.

reups  <span style="">09:39 Tue Feb 9 

Kestrelwing (MC alt) ~ For Approval


idk if this makes sense but there's shading that has leaked onto the tail from the head making it look a little striped???— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 15:58, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Add more shading on the back part of the image, and remove the shading on ==> that side of the tail, as your source is coming from that way 00:40, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Smooth the shading on his right hindleg and, not entirely sure, but I think he's supposed to have a gray nose 05:27, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Echosnout (MC) ~ For Approval
03:26, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading.

I have the file for the StarClan let me know if you need it. 20:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth.

Cloudspots (MC) ~ For Approval
My first medicine cat image. All colors from the rogue image, which I still have the file for. Coments? 05:11, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten the white on the paws and ears.

Reuploaded. I can't get the ears any whiter than this. 20:15, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 02:00, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:04, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the white paws? That should solve the issue of them looking grey. Also, could you possibly define the light on the herbs? <span style="">18:15, 02/8/2016

Reuploaded. 18:34, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Reed Tail (MC) ~ For Approval
Working with my own blank is harder then i tought o-o 13:01, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Difine the shading a smidge 13:13, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 19:30, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Swiftfoot (MC) ~ For Approval
13:16, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the shading a bit more? Nice job! <span style="">19:54 Sun Feb 7

Cloudberry (TC) (MC) - For Approval
Ahh, the only original MC I've ever had to my name.

Smooth out the shading everywhere but the tail, and define the eye depth. 19:12, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't comment on the grayness of the legs. I'm fixing that now.

Re-uploaded. Meh.

Define the shading 20:17, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Where would you like me to define it? The legs are about as defined as I'm going to get it (trust me, I've tried many times and they just look awful), and I think the tail is pretty good as well. Should I try to define the shading on the main body?

Oh sorry forgot to say. Yes just the body apart from that this is lovely! 21:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Re-uploaded. Darkened shading as per request but I am not going as dark as Sagewhisker.

I think with this source the head shading would be on the other side. 00:43, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a flat muzzle? <span style="">00:47, 02/9/2016

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a touch more scarly steals c:   05:28, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading needs to be smoothed out more, and I'm not sure if t here would be any shading on the back with the source as well. if I'm wrong feel free to correct me. 05:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. As I told you on Skype, Icy, I don't want to smooth out the shading. It's been a neverending circle with that- it's too smooth for some (myself included) and not smooth enough for others. I also don't want to get told to define it again. And tbh, I really don't want to go back to my old shading- it was too flat and it just ended up getting nominated in a few weeks anyways.

Sagewhisker (MC) ~ For Approval
I have a love-hate relationship with white cats. <span style="">19:49 Sun Feb 7

I just realized I forgot to lengthen her whiskers. I'll add them next upload. <span style="">19:55 Sun Feb 7

Lighten the shading a bit, please.

Re-uploaded <span style="">23:16 Sun Feb 7

Smooth out the shading on the legs and underbelly just a tad? Nice. 03:14, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I feel like the shading could be defused more it look a bit like the lines are blurred insted of shading, also can you please score out the image on the characters needing art page. 12:44, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I'm assuming the previous post means to blur the shading more/smooth it out?? Anyway, lighten it a bit more too please <span style="">22:33, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded <span style="">4:27 Tue Feb 9

Pebbleheart (MC) - For Approval
- all the colors are the same as the old one 08:13, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Possibly add some shading depth to the tail? And maybe lighten the berries to differentiate them from the fur <span style="">22:31, 02/8/2016

Re-uploaded 02:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the white chest? It looks too blurred. And I think the stripes go into it but it doens't look like that right now. 05:44, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:08, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

A little more, please. it looks too blended in with the fur. 15:09, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Mothflight (MC) - For Approval
- meh... looking at it now, I need to tweak the shading on the face... 08:13, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

None of her other images have texture, dear. =P

she should be greying too 12:26, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:02, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval
matched the colors with the old one— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:27, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

I can barely pick out the herbs from the fur. Maybe lighten the herb colours. 16:33, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#646464>Minkclaw Never stop believing. 16:39, February 8, 2016 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading, define and smudge the earpink, and define the shading on the herbs and berries. Also, there's waste in that space between the raised front leg and the hind leg that touches said leg. <span style="">18:12, 02/8/2016

Try to lighten the herbs some more. 05:45, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 17:59, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Should this not be called for evaluation? Sorry if I'm wrong. 18:24, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

There's no point in changing the heading now, considering she's already passed the requirements to become an apprentice in the project.

Milkfur (RC) (MC) - For Approval
I think I misnamed my file and forgot the RC part...and let me know if there needs to be a light texture layer beneath the stripes. It was sort of difficult to tell on the original beneath the smudging. <span style="">16:58 Mon Feb 8

Yeah, I'd move it, but that would alter the previous version as well. Just go ahead and upload over File:Milkfur (RC).mc.png whenever you have the time. And yes, there should be texture. I don't know many images of Beebs' that don't have texture.

Reuploaded Thanks, Cloud. That's what I thought about the texture. And I am defining it on the face on the next upload. <span style="">02:50 Tue Feb 9

Micah (MC) ~ For Approval
Eyyyyy 00:35, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Receed the shading on the chest, I think a bit more light would be hitting her chest, and, with your light source, the shading should switching to the other side of her left foreleg. Very pretty! 05:30, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Micahs a dude bro xD and also no to the leg, because the other leg is in front of that one and would be blocking light. 05:35, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

lightent eh chest and cheek shading— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:34, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The shading darkness is fine. Its the same darkness on the other images. Ill get to removing some chest shading tonight 18:52, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to lighten the shading that much, Winter. It does look a bit dark in some places. I know you prefer darker shading, but it does appear to clash in some places, such as the tail, face, and front legs.

But i cant lighten the shading depth without lightening it everywhere else, and id rather not get told to define the shading. 18:55, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Redthistle (MC) - For Approval
I literally have no idea how I did that pattern last time. o.o This is my attempt to replicate it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:06, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on the main body a tad? 06:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also sharpened the pattern a bit to make it match better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:25, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

smudge the leg markings a tad and sharpen shading on the legs as well more to the front— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) ~ For Approval
It's been a while... 06:07, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Defin e the shading and expand it on the stomach, and define the light on the first front legs. Also smooth it out some more. 06:11, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also tried to match the previous image better. It's so hard o.o 06:49, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded again 06:51, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add shading on the back leg and the tail and expand it on the stomach ? 06:53, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:58, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a little more?  <span style="">09:42 Tue Feb 9 

his stripes need mottles on them. 13:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

and crop the image too. 14:33, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Acorn Fur (MC) ~ For Approval
14:39, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

could you darken the cheek shading a tad?— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:32, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

Littlecloud (MC) - For Approval
All colors from the previous images.

can you curve the stripes a little more near his side and back. They look a little pointy and when I look at the older image they were a bit more curved.— <font face="Vivaldi" size="1" color="#08088A>Minkclaw River is Beauty, Beauty is Everything. 18:31, February 9, 2016 (UTC)

The stripes don't need to match 100%, as this is a different side of the image. Plus, it's kinda hard to curve them anymore than they already are without redoing the pattern. I'd also like to mention that the MC image was at a different angle.