Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 80

Sol (KP) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA was Icy, tweaked for tufted tail. Comments? 23:09, 08/13/2013

Tufted tail looks frayed and poofy. Have it like, more teardrop-shaped? 23:34 Wed Aug 14

Reuploaded. I think this is what was meant? Also, changes won't be showing for a few minutes- Wikia's being annoying. 01:44, 08/15/2013

Better! Sorry for not explaining enough, but I also intended to bring up what Ivy did on your warrior image. I also meant, like, also curl in the hair locks inward and make it sort of roundedish and flowing- I suck at explaining things! XP just look at the other images and note how the locks sort of curve with the flow. 02:07 Sun Aug 18

Declined due to the one week limit for tweaks.

I'll take over. 12:59, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hope I can do this. Changes not showing. 18:05, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

24 hours.

Cinderpelt(A) - Tweaked
OA was me retweaked shading, comments? 21:35, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on her paws? 00:17, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

front >>> shoulder highlight is misleading lightsourcewise. 02:09 Sun Aug 18

Eh, I'm withdrawing this. 19:45, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

May I take over? I'll be back Thursday. And Kelps, what do you want me to do bout the shoulder highlight? It's not very clear what you want me to do, sorry. 20:03, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure if I did her shoulder highlight right, as I wasn't sure what you meant, Kelps... 15:18, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

24 hours.

Moss (KP) ~ Tweaked
OAs were Silvereye, Cloudy, and Ashshadow. Shading was flat and had an unclear lightsource. Btw, I redid the shading but kept the base pelt and collar the same. (Also - changes aren't showing) Comments for improvement?

Maybe blur the shading a little on the tail? 02:25, August 19, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Lighten the shading a tad, please, unless it's just my laptop, I can't see the lineart. x3 22:19, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, imho.

Reuploaded. Honestly, shading irked me so I just redid the shading again. Changes are not showing.

Is it just me or is one of the eyes not fully filled in 07:24, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

Nah, Skt, I think it's just how pale the lighter green is. I could be wrong, but that's what it looks like. 15:36, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

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Henry (KP) ~ Redone
redone because lots of things and i tried to keep the pattern mostly the same as well as the eye style 06:39, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

24 hours.