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Stonefur (Ki) ~ Redone
OA is Sandstar12 with a redo by Spashpelt, and a tweak by Paleclaw. Redone to match the other images. You may have to go into the file history to see the changes. Comments? 22:10, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add shading to the tail? 22:42, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded But it's faint in a way because I tried to add a good amount of shading but it came out pretty weird..Anyway changes aren't showing. 01:10, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:13, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

This was supposed to be tweaked...It only needed to be lightened. 06:44, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Well....it was put in the redo pile, so I redid it. And Dazzle define the shading where? Or everywhere? 14:29, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Nope It was in the tweak pile... 16:29, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

DX Oh...my bad..DX Do I have to redo/tweak it again? 16:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I guess it's fine to keep it this way... =) Because if you had to do it over again, it would be extra work. Just make sure to check the pile more next time. :P Everybody makes mistakes, and I don't think people should punished for that. 20:46, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Just around the tail and legs~ ;3 22:49, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

No, I think the shading should be defined everywhere. It's kind of difficult to see. 23:44, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Aww thanks Stoney! <3 01:16, May 8, 2012 (UTC) ^^

Blur the ear pink in that~> ear and make the ear pink in <~that ear a bit more triangular ;3 02:04, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded DX I'm stupid...I re-uploaded but forgot to say that I did..XD lol 02:09, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad. Skt Like a baws  13:59, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 02:05, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (W) - Redone
needed to match elder. Original artist was Darkhallows. Comments? jack never let go, loonie ❤  22:20, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

He needs tufted ears. Please add that. 22:26, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Also, there appears to be a white pixel on the second fur spike (I hope you understand that). 22:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the shading on the paws. 22:54, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

The pixels look sort of uneven on the forehead. 23:12, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it match more by smudging the stripes more? 23:38, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? jack never let go, loonie ❤  00:08, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that shading~ ouo Also, it looks like there isn't any stripes on his front leg farthest from us. Can you add some/make them darker if they're already there? x3 01:24, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Try taking the tufts from the other image. These seem a bit.... big. *can't think of any other word to describe it* XD 08:21, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded better? owo -- jack  never let go, loonie ❤  00:36, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down/Blur ze "highlights" 01:31, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading and lighten the tail shading ouo 01:58, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Also, darken the stripes to match his other images~ 02:11, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Just blur the shading all over. Breeze whisker  03:56, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of teh white pixel in the second tuft of chest fur owo 09:37, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. 12:13, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? ;) 01:24, 13, 05, 2012

I can't get the stupid shading right x.x. Withdrawing~  jack  never let go,   diane ❤''' 16:20, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 18:01, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:00, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading, and add some to the neck. Breeze whisker  01:46, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you're looking at the current version, as the version I uploaded isn't anywhere to be seen in the file history. xD 02:50, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (w) - Redone
Ok, Hope i'm doing this right. my first tweak/redo :3 OA was 17silverthistle. I got the earpink and the grey shades and the eye color straight from the elder (I just made the stripes a bit darker) 06:18, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes darker and lighten up the earpink. 06:51, 07, 05, 2012

Could you add a pupil, white, and depth to the eye? 08:06, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Just take the earpink from the elder, and the ear's not meant to be dark. It's probably just shading you're seeing on the elder. 08:19, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I just don't have much eye to ad depth too xDD And if I add a pupil I'll have much less, Is it okay if I make they eye a bit bigger? And yes^ I took the earpink from the elder, I will lighten the shading around the ear to define it a bit. -- 08:49, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened the stripes, also fixed the earpink situation (Hopefully) Also, I made his eye a bit bigger, and added more depth/white. If you think I should change it back, I will, But I think it looks better xD -- 09:13, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you get rid of that stripe under his earpink? Skt Like a baws  09:29, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the tail shading, and rotate the eye depth so its darker on top and lighter on the bottom. Also, you don't need to tell us what you did when you reupload. You can just say 'Reuploaded' ;3 Also, can you make the eye its regular size? It's not impossible to add depth with it normal sized. 15:06, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the eye. Is it even a possibility to make the eyes on the warrior bigger? I only have three pixels to work with, and two when I add the pupil. o.o Also. Does it matter if the xcf file isn't named the same as the png? I have it on RBG xcf and i'm afraid if I rename it I won't be able to access layers since RBG has been the only one I've been able to edit the warrior under. -- 23:29, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to make the eye bigger to color it properly. Look here if your having trouble with it. And it doesn't matter if the .xcf file is named the same. As long as there's .xcf after it, it will have the layers. *if that's what your asking* 00:11, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the shoulder and neck shading. 00:13, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. I have no idea if I missed something here.. But the warrior deputy eye is much bigger than the one that came with this warrior lineart. I literally only have two pixels to work with. that one has seven. I mean, I really don't mind keeping it like this if you guys think it looks good, just weird looking to me. -- 06:25, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Just keep the eye as it is. Darken the stripes a bit more. 09:52, 08, 05, 2012

It's all right if you want to keep the eye, but what you would do is just color over the eye lineart to make it look bigger. ^^ 22:34, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

xDD Thats what I did, Dazzle. -- 22:42, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

You need to erase the two black pixels on the back of the eye where there's two pixels :p before, you erased the corner pixels which made his eye look really big, but whatever ^^ Blur the shading and ear pink. 00:12, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 21:59, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the stripes better with his other images 02:51, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading a little bit and blur the earpink? Breeze whisker  03:36, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaed -- 19:41, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes match more by darkening them a bit and defining them around the edges a bit. 00:38, 12, 05, 2012

Re-uploaded I Really tried to match the stipes to the other images. -- 02:28, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 05:20, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Add more of the iris in. You've only got one pixel in there for the iris, and it's very small, tbh. 09:02, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

e.o Sorry, changes aren't showing, I have no idea why. -- 09:12, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

It's alright, they'll show up soon enough xD Blur the neck shading. 01:37, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

If the changes aren't showing, maybe upload it to iaza and send us the link? Define and make the ear pink more triangular. 16:02, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stonepelt (W) ~ Redone
Changes aren't showing. This had shading issues. Latest OA was Flamingomom3. Honestly, I feel the whole thing needs to match the elder more. If a SW or two thinks so two, I'll redo it. 11:18, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that shading =D <3, and there's waste inbetween the legs. o3o 20:27, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight, rotate the eye depth so its darker on top and lighter on the bottom, thin out some of the stiipes, and makes the ear pink less lop-sided. 00:07, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a little? Breeze whisker  00:48, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes sharper and smudge the tail stripes? 21:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

So, does anyone think I should redo this to match the warrior? I striked it out to make it seem somewhat hidden x3. 22:31, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

I have no issue with you redoing it.

I thought it was nominated for a redo? 0.o I could of sworn it was a redo, not a tweak.... well anyways yeah, I think a redo would be fine. 09:25, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I did nominate it for a reso. (I hope it was me, my memory is horrendous) so yeah, redo lol. Skt Like a baws  09:35, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

All the info said was that the shading needed to be redone. I'll work on that later, since I'm slightly busy at the moment. 11:19, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:43, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add some more under the neck. Breeze whisker  03:33, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes and earpink. Also, maybe darken the base coat to match the elder better. 04:38, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste in between the haunch and front paws - that triangle. Erase it. x3 01:25, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes on his head a tad. 01:36, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some stripes to match the elder. 06:42, 13, 05, 2012

Snowbird (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow. Comments? 01:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, define the highlight on the shoulder, and there's some blurred lineart/waste on the tail and in the ear :3 01:43, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 09:05, 09, 05, 2012

Re-Ups^ 15:24, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit? 02:07, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, file changes weren't showing. here they are. 16:42, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Fallowtail (E) - Redone
Needed to be light brown, not golden. OA was Loudsplash, and Teldy. Comments? 23:27, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

This is still pretty golden-looking. You might desaturate it a little. Breeze whisker  02:02, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I don't think this needed to be redone even though that it was on the list...It was just a color tweak-the previous version just had the wrong hue, not messy shading or something like that. 02:35, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

But it was already voted yes on a redo stoney.... 05:56, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think you're looking at the wrong version Whiskery, it seems fine to me. 8/ Blur the tail shading. 08:56, 10, 05, 2012

Lighten the brown a bit :3 11:34, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, That furry texture (Which looks Absolutely amazing btw) Maybe blur the edge of it near the chest, unless its supposed to look that way, Looks Beautiful! :3 -- 19:45, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

 Still working on this? o.o

Tawnypelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Meeeep owo *kicks self* I should be studying but bleh. OA was me. Shelly and Ivy both left so... Comments? 23:28 Wed May 9

Bleh changes aren't showing. It's right here. 23:39 Wed May 9

Re-uploaded Didn't look mottled to me :/ Changes are here 00:15 Thu May 10

Hey, since I nominated this, I'd like to have a hand in how she looks. So, could you please add some more colors, specifically some orange? Google pale tortoiseshell cat, what you find is mostly this (I know it's a torbie, just ignore the stripes for now). 00:24, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm mighty proud of this *u* 03:03 Thu May 10

Awwww.... so cute. 8D Blur <--- earpink. 08:47, 10, 05, 2012

So cute! x3 Can you blur the tail shading and the chest shading? 18:13, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried a different pattern (I think it looks way better) :3 If the changes aren't showing it's right here 23:47 Thu May 10

Since we all seem to agree that Ivy's image should be her main image, could you try and match that? 14:02, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *celebrates* 23:22 Sun May 13

Rowanstar (Le) - Redone
OA was Bramble, tweak by Iceheart and a redo by Leafstorm. Pattern wasn't realistic. Comments? 03:49, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

You do black and brown cats better lawl. I think there's waste by his butt area. XP Skt Like a baws  03:51, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

The spots look more golden than brown. And the ones on the chest need to be blurred. Also, they look a bit paintbrush-y, maybe smudge them a bit to make them less uniform and round? 05:55, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste under above the tail and near his lower back. 22:06, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the wait, life's really kicking me in the butt... Changes are Here: 04:21, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Rainsplash (D) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandy (I think), and he needed to have stripes and the shading blurred. Comments? 01:57, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 05:38, 12, 05, 2012

Darken and blur the shading. 05:58, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

My cruddy eyes don't see stripes if there's supposed to be any.-- 15:28, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

But there are stripes... 18:12, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

I can't see any, but that's just my eyes. As I said, I have cruddy eyes for art.-- 18:50, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, then. 20:12, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wait for changes. 20:34, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to blur the shading more? Skt Like a baws  01:45, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to. Look in the file history for changes. 17:04, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) ~ Redone
Now I know I get this one xD Meh, me and my messed up eyes e.e Changes aren't showing.. OA was Mousetalon and it needed to be redone to match the other images. 01:42, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stormkit (SC) (ki) ~ Redone
OA was Sandstormrocks, and it needed to be ginger and gray, not golden-brown and...pale white. For changes, look here.

Define the stripes on the patches on her sides. 05:35, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

Can you blur the shading on her sides? 13:28, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink ^^;  jack  never let go,   diane ❤''' 16:25, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 

<3 Can you blur the chest shading a wee bit? 17:55, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Since it's a dual-coloured cat, the shading can't really be like it is on a solid, since you need to be able to see it on both colours.

I think that there is a white pixel near both of her paws, and can you enlarge/center the earpink? 19:57, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

What white pixel? And the ear pink is fine as well. It //is// centered, and if I make it any bigger, it'll look awkward.

I think I can see pixels of waste clinging to her paws. Skt Like a baws  01:51, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Dawnfeather with tweaks from Night shine and Scarlet, and it needed stripes. If changes don't show, look here. Comments? 05:57, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the shading some. Also if possible try not to make stripes overlap the flecks. :3 <span style="">07:04, 13, 05, 2012

Reuploaded. Kind of hard to get rid of the flecks and make the stripes look normal, so I didn't remove all of them. :3 07:18, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a tad too thick, can you thin them out a bit? 13:34, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes, sharpen the face stripes, and the stripes on her front legs and tail look off. Try to match them better with her second alt. queen? 15:55, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
I'm not sure who the OA was..since the alt was changed a while back. It could easily be Goldenpaw, Mistyheart //or// Sweetflower. I might be Goldenpaw...not sure... For changes, see here.

Tawnypelt (A) ~ Redone
Redone to match the warrior x.x OAs were Hiddensun, Blossomtear and Iceheart22. Comments? 09:54, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and back shading. Pretty! ^^  13:31, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder marking and lessen the smudged effect to match the warrior. 15:58, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Add the white spot around her left eye. ;) 16:13, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Wait for changes~ 22:31, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ Redone
How Ivystripe made this so beautifully...I'll never know. o.o Redone to match the warrior; OA's were Sparrowsong and whoever that weird Rainlegs person is. 16:15, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her belly and lighten the earpink. Pretty <3  jack  never let go,   diane ❤''' 16:18, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe texturize the white as well? Great job, Leggy~ <3 22:00, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) ~ Redone
Yup, redone to match. OA was Twee I think. Comments? 02:00 Mon May 14

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink 03:37, May 14, 2012 (UTC)