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Guardian Cat Blanks - CBA
honestly i'm pretty sure these are a bit big so if yall want i can try and resize them. sorry they're not the exact same as on the nominations, i used them for my own wiki and tweaked the tails and long fur a bit, hope its not a problem.

Maybe add another toe to the short-haired blank to match the long-furred one. 21:21, 6/13/2018

reups i noticed that before you commented and actually did the opposite, woops.

Yes, can you try and resize them? 21:51, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

reups some pixels were lost in the resizing but i tried my best to restore them. that was so much harder than it needed to be.

Are whiskers a requirement? I’m wondering if you should add them, but idk. 23:45, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

can you make the face look more fluffy and the tail on the longhair? 23:52, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

smooth out the lineart on the shorthaired's belly? it looks a little uneven on the > side of the cat

reups guess i forgot to readd whiskers after resizing it oops

Maybe make the back paws a little bit bigger? these are great^^ 02:54, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Thin out the top half of the shorthair's tail a bit?

Gonna butt in here and say the short-haired tail looks fine to me. I don't think it needs to be thinned out at all, considering multiple blanks we use have that same style. (  11:00, 6/14/2018  ) ​

Gosh I do love these. Could you thicken the lineart on the feet and somewhat up the legs on the front paws? (On both blanks) 00:00, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

reups thanks ^^

Perhaps thicken the lineart on the backside of the longhaired and along the topside of the > ear on both^^

the closest front leg seems to be a little too bendy, and should be just a tad straighter. (from what I can tell off similar refs) and I think the shoulder lineart goes too far inwards compared to the longhair. 21:29, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

reups alright, i think i got it.

I don't know if I'm even allowed to come with feedback, but I think there's a gray pixel on the <-- leg on the long haired one.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 20:06, June 19, 2018 (UTC)

reups you are ^^ also i apparently missed quite a bit of waste when fixing the legs, oops 21:44, June 19, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:24, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Harepaw (VS) (Ki) - CBA
tried shading with the brushes i have in firealpaca since i havent done a full charart with it before, couldve been worse.

Define the shading depth everywhere, but especially between the two legs. This looks good :) 22:29, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

reups ty but i still hate white cats with a burning passion. the kit blank however, has never done me dirty.

Expand the shading overall

reups i should really go back to the old art program for shading. oh, how i insulted its brushes. too bad i got so used to them i cant shade with firealpaca.

reups again redid shading. trying to keep it smudged

smooth out the shading

^ I personally think the shading looks smooth enough except for the chest area and just a tad for the tail. I use firealpaca too, so I understand your frustration, danny. You got this! :) 01:09, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

I disagree. I think all the shading should be smoothed out a bit. 23:32, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

reups went ahead and blurred it. sorry for the wait, real lifes been busy. will upload blank changes in a few minutes

Comments before approval? 23:25, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Ivypool (Q) ~ For Approval
Hi I'm gonna tweak this so she has shredded ears and so the shading actually looks good. Also, can we add stuff if it's a completely different side? None of the other images even show this side of her. I can take it off if I have to, don't worry.

it's all up to you what to put on the side that isn't shown, yes. 03:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

re-up

Define the light on the ---> foreleg a bit? 17:22, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

The stripes are overblurred, I feel. And the shading is leaking on the stomach.

Define the tail shading?

re-up I'm gonna ask for a second opinion on the stripes because I checked and I feel like it's around the same blurriness. I'll define the light later.

Compared to the images I think the stripes could be sharpened a tiny bit. 23:26, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Echosong (loner) ~ For Approval
yeah i dont like this --

I think it’s good! Could you define the shading, though? 23:29, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --

The stripes on the legs could be smudged out more, and maybe have one or two more stripes on the haunch that go more diagonally between the ones that go just downwards and just > way. iirc also the muzzle should be pale and the stripes go lightly over the chest, to match the other images

Mothflight (Ro) - For Approval
I like Moth Flight. 23:00, June 16, 2018 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a lil. 00:47, 6/17/2018

Reuploaded 22:47, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and smooth it out. 23:26, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:12, June 21, 2018 (UTC)

Crowfeather (D) - For Approval
00:54, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

define the texture on the paler parts, and blend the paler bits in just a bit. 22:58, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 13:02, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Now that I've got wifi for 30 minutes, I can send you the file if you somehow reply right away. But anyways can you define the paler parts more? I can't see it.

Haha, think I might have missed you, Fox. If you are available my email is icestormrocks@aol.com, but I will define the pale parts as soon as I can. 15:26, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 21:29, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Skywatcher (W) ~ For Approval
05:28, 6/17/2018

hmm correct me if wrong, but I don't think he'd need the floof for the top of his head, to match with his other images that all don't have it there. if we're allowed to vary in placement, ignore me

I mean, I don't think ragged fur has to match between images... 16:23, 6/18/2018

it doesn't, since ragged fur will never always be the same. can you define the shading depth a little though? 23:24, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope this makes a different, I don't want the shading to be so dark, y'know? 23:55, 6/20/2018

Dewspring (W) ~ For Approval
Cosmo made this first, so I am redoing it, but also not redoing it? I think kits were allowed to redo the chararts Cosmo originally made.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 19:17, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

We decided if she made the original image, then we would act like they were not made, so anyone could "redo" it. Add the texture and define the shading depth. 19:21, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink color needs to match the other images as well, and this seems to be a different shade^^

Add texture as well. Sorry didn’t see Vec's comment. 21:07, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

If I picked the color correctly, codes for the pelt and earpink are 7e7e7e and 896565, if that is helpful. Smooth out the shading a little bit. 22:02, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This was kinda hard... Never done texture before.

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 11:31, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps define the texture. 13:04, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. 14:00, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

The earpink color is still the wrong color, and the base color looks darker on this than the other images. Might be the shading in this case, if so define the light so the base shows through, or lighten the base itself to match^

Re-uploaded 100% it's the right color now. Completely redid the shading, but I don't seem to get it right. Any tips? Also, I don't really understand what you mean with "define shading depth". Help? :P --

~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 15:43, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

There's shading leaking behind the ---> ear. And it's okay! Shading depth is the gradience of the shading. Take a look at any object in the real world that has shadows on it. Notice how the shadows are all the same color? There's depth to it. Take a look at Broken's image above yours of Skywatcher. Notice how the shadows are blurred and have some depth (ie are not the same color)? The shading in the center of the image is different from the shading near the lineart.

One way to add shading depth, add another layer on top of your preexisting shading layer. Add some more shading with whatever color you used prior but make it a bit darker and recede it a bit so the first shading layer is shown. Blurr/smudge it however you want and lower the opacity so that it seems smooth against the other shading layer. Most people use 2 to whatever shading layers. I hope this helps ^^ 19:29, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Here some visual aids for you. Here are my shading layers for Parsleyseed. You don't have to have that many, but I tend to be messy with shading. It's all about your preference. Here is just my first layer of shading. The left side has the opacity lowered, while the right side has it raised so you can see it. Here are the second layer and third layer of shading. Each layer is smoothed and has its opacity lowered so it appears to blend in. :D 19:51, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Vec! I played around with some different layers and I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. ~Wafflepaw/heart of BlogClan~ 20:04, June 19, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs/paws ear/head area, and muzzle, there's a few out of place lighter pixels on the back, shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back/rump, and texture is leaking away from the lineart on the chest, both sides of the tail, back paws, muzzle, and < front leg

Probably define the texture, tone down the tail texture as it kind of looks out of place, maybe add more texture lines, and smooth out the shading.

Harepaw (VS) (App) ~ CBA
I may mess with the face shading 22:53, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Good job :D Define the shading, please. 22:54, June 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:58, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 23:28, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Parsleyseed (Ki) ~ CBA
Had a lot of fun with this guy 05:19, June 18, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? Love this image. 00:00, 6/21/2018

Pinenose (Ro) - For Approval
04:16, June 19, 2018 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading?