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Rockshade - Silver Nomination
Mkay, so I'm putting this back up. It was archived a while ago, but I think I had fixed everything up until the point it was archived, at least. So, um, comments? :3 22:26, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to find any quotes that describes him better? Otherwise looks great! 23:39, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd rather go for quality rather than quantity of quotes. 00:16, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, he says a lot, so you should find a good quote for him that describes his personality. 05:05, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well there weren't many good ones left, but I managed to find one better than the first quote I had for him. I think the other two describe his personality fairly well. The second showing his more fierce side, and the third showing his more caring side. :3 22:55, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I guess they're fine... 07:00, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

They're a lot better this time! Nice job! 17:25, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a The Rescue section. 17:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ah geez. xD I don't have that book, so um, can anyone who has it help me with it? :3 15:01, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help. Wild fire  20:48, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looking great, Rainwhisper. ;) But I don't think there should be the word "in" before SkyClan's Destiny in the main quote's caption. Also, in the title for the SkyClan and the Stranger Series, the word "Series" isn't linked to the SkyClan and the Stranger Series page, although some articles such as Sharpclaw's, Tinycloud's, and Clovertail's are. If this isn't a big deal, then there's no need to fix it, but I'm not sure about this so I'm just expressing my opinion. :) 23:50, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed The SKyClan and the Stranger Series section, but the main quote is supposed to be like that. Also, thanks so much Wildfire. ^^ 13:43, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

sorry if that's not very good but that's all he did. I don't know if you need a reference but it was on page 38 that he appeared. Wild fire  22:53, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 01:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote's up! 01:17, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Splashkit - Silver Nomination

 * She's expanded to the maximum so I asked, "Why not?" 22:46, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

These chracter pages have to be posted seperately, it says so in the rules on the top of the page. Echostar 00:52, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

After you post them separately, I think it's good! Just check to see if you can't add anything else. 17:53, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. If possible, use a lot of describing words and such to make the article bigger, if you can. 21:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so I separated both articles but I was thinking hard and basically, there are no more words to use for either of these articles. 23:44, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then, looks good! 18:47, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! If there are no objections, then is on the To-Be-CBVed list. 03:47, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 01:10, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Seems ready for it! 18:32, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Morningkit - Silver Nomination
Like above, expanded to the maximum and looks good. 23:44, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, then! Looks nice! 23:47, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed after more votes close. 18:52, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  14:12, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 20:11, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 01:19, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:17, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Dewkit ~ Silver Nomination
I added a quote. Comments?

That was me. Forgot my siggie. 07:06, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think she's ready! She wasn't seen very much in Night Whispers, but her article is well written. The first paragraph seemed kind of short, so I expanded it a little. 15:18, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you sure there's no more narrator quotes or anything like that? 17:51, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yea because that's pretty much all she says in the whold book so....yea. And thanks, Ivyheart for expanding the history! 71.135.168.24 09:02, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

What happened to my siggie?oh, there.

Looks good then! 22:13, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! Great job! 18:17, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Where any of them (Dewkit, Mistkit, Sparrowkit) seen in Sign of the Moon? I don't think they were, so I guess you should add that, unless they were seen. 23:27, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, they weren't, but I don't think they died, either. I'll add it then. 23:36, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think Sparrowkit in the main quote is supposed to be linked to his page, but I'm not sure. Otherwise, this article looks superb to me. :) 00:50, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. 22:36, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! On the CBV list then. 20:19, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

So...CBV? 20:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 16:19, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mistkit (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
I saw that Dewkit was nominated, so I checked out Mistkit and expaned her article, and I thought it was good enough. Now we just need a main quote, but I'm not sure how to add it in. Comments? 20:14, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think it can be expanded some more. For the main quote see this: Template:Main Quote, and you should be able to add it in. 20:24, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I added in a main quote, it was the only thing she said, but I guess it's ok. As for the history, I will try to expand it more, if possible. She didn't appear very much. 21:26, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded the history as much as I could. 21:46, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

History looks much better now! Nice job! =) Are you sure there aren't any narrator quotes that you could use? 22:26, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I don't think there are any good narrator ones, as far as I've looked. 23:32, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, looks good then! 23:39, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Does anyone think there are more things I should check out? 18:03, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nope! It looks good. 01:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think there was a good narrator quote, but I guess I'm wrong. Looks great! 18:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

So it's almost ready, I guess? 17:44, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it will probably be on the CBV list. 17:46, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

It is. 03:45, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Where is the CBV list? xD 19:13, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's a mental list. :) 17:28, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Allrighty then xD 15:34, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 21:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 16:45, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower ~ Silver Nomination
I'm still looking for quotes that describe her personality and checking for grammar mistakes. Besides those, comments? -- 06:52, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

These quotes looks good! I'm pretty sure I fixed all the grammar mistakes, so you don't have to worry about that. 16:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to add more detail to the last paragraph, as in does she say anything, do anything, etc.? 16:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Could you expand the last paragraph of Crookedstar's Promise? 16:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! I'll go check the book right now and do the things above later if possible. 07:40, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the last paragraph. How does it look now? 07:56, July 19, 2011 (UTC)L

Looks great! 18:43, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Good work! This can be cBVed once more votes close. 23:58, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks great! The article looks as long as it could be. 03:31, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 15:10, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) - Silver Nomination
Woo. He looks good, his history is expanded and he has references. 23:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have any quotes? From the narrator or anything? 02:19, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Just realized...you already have 4 nominations up. Sorry, but the guidelines say that you can only have 3 nominations up at a time, so this will be archived. After the votes close for you other ones, you can start this again... 18:57, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Since Sedgecreek is on voting, I'm going to start this up again. Comments? 01:34, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Like I said before, does he have any quotes? 02:58, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll see. 15:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (TC) ~ Silver Nomination
I'm expanding it now and trying to find quotes. 19:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I thought you said that you didn't nominate minor characters. Find the quote mentioned in the second paragraph of the history. 19:32, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't, but my new goal is to nominate them all in alphabetical order, so I just happened to find a minor character that isn't silver already. 19:53, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

There, I expanded it to it's extent. Please don't say expand it more, as I already did, and it can't be expanded further. I also found quotes. Anything else? 21:16, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

It seems fine to me. 23:44, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! Good job. 02:27, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, this will be on the CBV list. 20:20, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sparrowkit - Silver Nomination
I'm adding another quote in right now. So, comments? :3 23:22, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Add another quote, and add in the quote descriptions, and it should be ready! 23:48, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can it be expanded some more? 23:57, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

The three littermates are being nominated at the same time! xD The article looks great, though I think the history could be expanded, if you look through the chapters they are in, in Night Whispers. That's how I expanded Mistkit's article. 17:46, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded his history and gave the quotes descriptions, but there isn't really anymore quotes that describe him well. If he reallly needs another quote, though, I'll add one. 19:13, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

His article is looking great! :) 19:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! 19:43, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think another quote would be nice since the article is so short anyway. 23:50, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

After another quote, it'll probably look good. 19:31, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mkay, I'll add one. 19:44, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Added. 15:43, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Looks great! 16:48, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ditto! 16:49, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Beechpaw (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
I hate nominating characters that appear so briefly that there's hardly anything about them. Oh well. Hopefully this gets approved fast so I can do a better one. Comments? 19:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any quotes from the narrator that can be added? 19:41, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

No, there's literally only one sentence that mentions him in the book at all. 23:33, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

If there's absolutely no other quotes you can have for him/her, then I don't see what else you can do. -- 04:43, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ditto. 22:45, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

One more for the CBV list! :P 20:21, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstar (RC) ~ Silver Nomination
I believe that her article is looking good! I think she has some good quotes at the bottom, and a great main quote. I expanded her history a lot, too. So, Comments? 19:35, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any longer quotes that she says or the narrator says? Also, you might just want to proofread to catch any mistakes. Looks great! 19:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I just read the book, and there's some other longer quotes that can be added. And I got a lot of grammar mistakes, but I'm not sure if that's all. 23:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about the quotes; I added a lot in. 23:49, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good, thanks! I'm gonna go check right now if I can expand it or anything else. 23:54, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Could you cut up the first paragraph of Code of the Clans to different ones? It looks too...big. 20:05, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. ☀  S q  u  i  r  r  e  l  F  l  a  m  e  2  9 ☀   Finally   Cooling   it   Down  21:16, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Much better! 16:51, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Anything else I can do? 03:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. 17:01, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Milkfur (RC) - Silver Nomination
There isn't much information about Milkfur, so what else could I do to the article? 03:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any quote(s) such as from the narrator that can be used as a main quote? 04:13, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's the ONLY quote I could find for him. 04:23, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Where does it say he is a tom? As I recall, the book never said if Milkfur was a tom or she-cat. Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  14:17, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I just checked, and you might want to get a reference for that. 23:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I removed the gender thing, so now he/she is upspecified, I just forgot to say that 22:03, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, looks good! 18:41, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBV list for this one too. 20:22, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw ~ Silver Nomination
His page looks good. I'm still expanding Firestar's Quest and looking for some quotes and grammar mistakes. And how do I remove a category? Someone added in The Rescue categroy for Sharpclaw by mistake but I don't know how to remove it. 06:26, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Just The Rescue, not The Rescue characters? 14:06, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. It's on The Rescue. The Rescue characters can stay, but The Rescue category needs to go away. xD 14:11, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't have The Rescue, so I don't know if it's possible, but could you expand that last paragraph? Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  14:18, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. I'll try to expand it. 14:25, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok, I got rid of it for you. And could you find some more quotes? I'm sure there's better ones in SkyClan's Destiny. 23:50, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't have SkyClan's Destiny right now, but I have The Rescue, and there's one quote I'm going to add in right now. 01:56, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Note: I'm still working on this.....Just thought you guys should know. xD 14:43, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand Firestar's Quest a tad more? 20:03, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Does anyone want to take over this? I don't feel like working on this anymore. I don't have Firestar's Quest and SkyClan's Destiny right now, and I can only expand The Rescue. Basically, I can't help improve this page without Firestar's Quest and SkyClan's Destiny. 05:20, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

So.....is anyone going to take this nomination? 14:14, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so. Since no one's claimed it for a week, this will probably be archived. 19:46, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose ~ Silver Nomination
I'm expanding it right now, and I'm not going to stop until it's silver! :) 18:12, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I forgot that I already had three nominations up. This is now temporarily closed, and I'd appreciate it if no one took it from me! =) 20:02, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Since my votes are now supposed to be over, I'm starting this again. Comments? 01:05, August 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * speechless* Wow...this is amazing! For such a minor character, it looks like he's the main priority of the book! Beetlenose's Promise...sounds like a good name. xD Could you find his eye color? Is that possible? 16:54, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... I looked through the book again but couldn't find it. As he only shows in this book, I decided to expand as much as possible. ;) Thanks, Icestorm! Other comments? 02:56, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

None from me :) 21:57, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, I found a few spelling errors here and there, but other than that, no...no comments from me. xD 21:59, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I always have a lot of spelling mistakes while typing really fast. XD 22:43, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! On the CBV list, obviously. 17:31, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgestar - Silver Nomination
Looks ready. :3 16:08, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can it be expanded anymore? I understand if you can't. 18:08, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so, I believe he only appears onone page. 20:52, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

If there aren't any narrator quotes, it looks good! 19:30, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

I just checked through her article, and it seems pretty good for a very minor character. Ivyheart 15:50, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Rainsplash - Silver Nomination
Yeah, looks ready..too. xD 16:08, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Quotes? I think there's only one though. See if you can find more. Like Sedgestar, can it be expanded? 18:09, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, quotes could be added as there are an inaquedate number right now. Can you find any narrator quotes? 19:29, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really know, I checked the book again and he says one thing. I can't find a narrator quote, but I'm not the best searcher. xD 15:47, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, you can add that quote in as a main quote, and no one will bother you about quotes anymore. XD 18:40, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! 16:47, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

To-be-CBVed then? 20:24, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed your qoute, you forgot qoutation marks :) 01:01, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Diesel ~ Silver Nomination
I know this needs a lot of work, so this is like a reservation. 21:51, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I have the book. I'll see about expanding it. 22:19, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

There! I expanded it and added quotes. Better, Mistystar? 02:57, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Squirrelflame! Comments? 02:56, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think Warrior's Return in the bottom two quotes should be linked to their articles. 00:57, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's done now. :P 18:45, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful job! 20:02, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Squirrelflame! 20:25, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Willowkit (CP) - Silver Nomination
I added some quotes and I think she's ready, so comments? 16:04, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the article can be expanded. 18:36, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

"Willowkit, along with Minnowkit and Willowbreeze, lose their lives to greencough." I think that this could be written two ways, either as "Willowkit, Minnowkit, and Willowbreeze lose their lives to greencough" or "Willowkit, along with Minnowkit and Willowbreeze, loses her life to greencough." It's correct grammar to me. ;) Also, I believe there is no need to put in before the reference in the bottom quote because no other quotes I've seen are quite in that format. When it says the book title and the page number above the caption of the quote in superscript, I think it's just a source, not actually part of the caption. It looks very nice, though. :) 00:56, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think the best way to write that is: "Willowkit and her sisters, Minnowkit and Willowbreeze, lose their lives to greencough." And the quote must have page number for reference becuase that's the way the template is and quotes are. 23:14, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I like the way you rewrote the sentence, SquirrelFlame. :) And as a reply to your second statement, I think you misunderstood me. I meant that it was weird to put the word "in" before the source because most quotes I've seen aren't put in that format. Let me show you. Here's what the quote in the article looks like currently (I've bolded the word "in"):

It looks pretty unusual to me when the caption is written as if the caption itself and the source are connected. So my point is that I think Rainwhisper should fix this. But that's just my opinion. ;) 23:26, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind. I just fixed it myself and I hope Rainwhisper doesn't mind. :) Just wanted to explain to clear things up. 23:31, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, you're right, silly me. :P Yeah, it shouldn't have been like that. Thanks for clearing up the misunderstanding! ☀  S q  u  i  r  r  e  l  F  l  a  m  e  2  9 ☀   Finally   Cooling   it   Down  19:09, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh thanks, Rainshine. ^^' I'll get to expanding it now. :3 20:34, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded it. ;3 20:41, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job with the expanding! Looks better! ☀  S q  u  i  r  r  e  l  F  l  a  m  e  2  9 ☀   Finally   Cooling   it   Down  22:45, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to flesh out the Warriors App section a bit? 19:59, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

No not really. That's basically all the app says about her. 15:50, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, then! 17:27, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang ~ Silver Nomination
I filled in The Power of Three section as much as I could. I will add in any new ideas. Thanks! 22:58, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a dialogue quote? It would be nice... Other than that, expand Fire and Ice, Forest of Secrets, The Darkest Hour, Starlight, Sign of the Moon, and Secrets of the Clans. Sorry, I know that's a lot. ;) Also go through and change everything to present tense. Fix any grammar issues too. 23:19, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

yeah what Squirrelflame said and should the yellowfang's secret heading be up so early? Oh no! emergency!  C a n y o n <font color="#8A8A8A">s <font color="#A1A1A1">o <font color="#B0B0B0">n <font color="#C2C2C2">g   <span style="color:#FFFFFF;background:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#CC1100;">Candypaw to the rescue!   23:25, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but Yellowfang already is Silver. 00:28, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Velvet ~ Silver Nomination
I added quotes, and expanded the article, comments? 16:41, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Article looks great! I'm really sure it can't be expanded, but just check to make sure. ;) For some weird reason, the references for the quotes are kind of weird... I'll fix it. Also, the last sentence in the main quote:I gave you are daughter, remember? seems kind of odd. Can you check that sentence in the book, please? 19:14, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

LOL, SquirrelFlame, you're right. ;) My best guess is that "are" was meant to be "our." But I'm not sure, so I'm not going to fix it. Atelda, this looks great! Only in the main quote's caption, I don't think there should be a period after "Red" or the word "in" before SkyClan's Destiny. None of the other quotes are quite like that. I also think you should get rid of the period after the word "do" in the second quote down in the quotes section. Also, in the last sentence of the last paragraph of her SkyClan's destiny section, I think "their" should be "they're." Everything else looks fantastic to me. :) 21:21, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wow, today must be off. Anyways, I checked through the book and she's not mentioned again. And quotes and silly spelling errors on my part have been fixed. 22:06, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I got a few grammar mistakes here and there and it looks good to me. 22:40, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Same here. 18:57, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lawl, thanks! So...comments? 18:58, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! 16:58, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add in some links in the summary, other then that it looks great! :D 01:04, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Meh, there wasn't much to link, but done! xD 01:48, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

On the CBV list, then! 17:21, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Three Quote Limit
Were we ever following that rule? 22:40, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nahhh. I don't think so. ;) I mean, what about the cats that are so minor that they don't even hit three, or the cats that are so major that it's hard to pick the best ones? And even if we were capable of the aforementioned, what would be the point? Unless having three quotes makes articles appear seemingly organized. At least, that's what I think. 23:53, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, it was never really enforced. I think everyone know the right amount for an article without going overboard. And someone could always say, "there are too many quotes, I think you should delete..." 00:16, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. 00:54, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Has the limit been taken off the rules? 19:30, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

We should rephrase the rule to something like: ''The number of quotes in the article should reflect the amount of times the character appears in the books. ''That way it seems more resonable. 19:18, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

That seems a bit extreme. If we went with that, Firestar would have about five-hundred quotes. 01:33, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, then, how about for the main or major characters the limit is about 6 or 7? And for the supporting characters it's 4 or 5. For the really minor characters there shouldn't be a limit because it would be nice to have as many as possible for them. 22:15, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think 7 or 6 would be a bit too much. How about 5? Supporting characters should have about four in my opinion. 01:08, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

To be honest, I don't think we should have a limit. Users probably know if there are too many quotes or too few of quotes. Mayve say that an average number of quotes for, say a supporting character, is four quotes. That way it gives users an idea of how many quotes should be used. 01:15, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really think we should have a limit. Quality over quantity is better. 03:56, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok then, I was thinking that too. Should we just get rid of the rule altogether then? 22:18, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I like the average number of quotes better. xD 21:54, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Robinstar - Silver Nomination
<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">I expanded the article and changed his description. :) Comments? 00:07, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Looks good! I would strongly suggest to change the style a bit as it messes with the flow of the article. Is there any quotes too, like from the narrator? 00:25, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">What exactly do you mean by "the style," Atelda, could you be more specific, please? :) And although Robinstar doesn't say anything himself, I'll check to make sure if Leafpool (the narrator) says anything fitting. 00:28, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Style is basically how the article is written whether it be from run-on sentences or just some out of place words. It's easy to fix. ;) 00:53, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Since we dont know the gender of the cat, I changed one he to a s/he for you. 15:45, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Thanks Ivystripe! :) And I'll get right on it, Atelda. 16:28, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Alright, I fixed the style and added a quote. But if the quote seems out of place or if anyone thinks it should be the main quote, suggest away. ;) 18:31, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">I think it should be a main quote since there isn't any other one. 18:55, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Yes, I agree with Mistystar. Also, a few sentences looked kind of odd to me so I rephrased them. If you want to see what I did, you can always check the history. =) 19:16, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">The quote doesn't seem to relate very much to the character though, so you could either put the quote as the main quote, delete altogether, or replace it. It comes down to preference on that one. I also caught few spelling and grammar issues. Nice work. 21:42, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Avoiding Phrases
In the FAQ it says to avoid some phrases. I ask what if a character is seen only every now and then such as Rosetail in Bluestar's Prophecy. It is hard not to use later in the book... or she is seen only when... Anyone know some words to put into the texts instead of those? 19:38, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to use anything. It works fine without anything. 15:41, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

And if you have to sneak in a transitional word, you can always shorten it to later, he/she did this. 19:11, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Also it says, to try not to use those phrases. It doesn't say not to use them. ;) 21:35, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thats fine but sometines it doesn't always say 2 moons later or such but thanks. 19:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Whitethroat ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 23:06, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Find a reference for the amber eyes part of the description. 00:07, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand A Dangerous Path and add some more quotes? 01:32, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

The last quote should either be deleted since it hardly says anything, or have a description showing why it is so important. 22:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, deleted the amber eyes part in the description, I expanded each section too, and replaced the last quote. I can add one more quote, but I don't think it's nessecary as it doesn't tell much about his personality if at all. 01:51, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

What's the last quote you found? I trust your judgement, but I just want to see for myself. :P 03:41, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Either, "W-Whitethroat and I came here h-hoping you'd give us food and healing herbs," and then I found this one, "Then he realized that Brokentail had forced these cats into apprenticeships when they were barely old enough to leave their mothers' sides. Banishing their cruel leader must have come as such a relief that what had happened to him afterward paled into insignificance." I found the second one while looking for the first and I'm actual leaning towards the second one as it basically needs a description to match. 03:52, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I like the second one more. Add in in and we'll see how it looks. 22:16, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done ;) 22:45, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

There were a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes, but I think I got most of them. 17:35, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

So...comments? 01:49, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nutmeg (KP) - Silver Nomination
Since we are not affiliated with PCA, this article is ready PC-wise. I have one more quote to add, and she'll be all set. 00:36, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. I fixed the quote it has - considering that not every letter needs to be capitalized. Good job! :) 00:40, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Y'all forgot something....
You know those boxes that are on the talk pages of characters? I was looking through, and it seems a lot of the newer ones are missing them. To save you all the aggravation, I'm doing it now. I know I'm not part of the project, but, I'm being nice. =) 01:11, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Cloudy! How on earth did you figure that out? :P 01:29, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Just because I'm not part of PC, doesn't mean I don't check character pages out...(XD) But, anyways... I noticed it a few days ago. I thought it was just laziness. It may just be because you just didn't realize it. Plus, I do all the maintenance with PB, so, I'm used to looking for this sort of thing. 01:49, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I think I got them all. If not, sorry. I tried. 03:05, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail Bronze?
You you think it's ready to go to Bronze? I know it's not a nomination but I need help changing it. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  07:36, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to nominate it. If you think it's ready, you put the bronze tag on it. 15:51, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I changed it, but I suggest you go to the PC page and scroll down a little till you see "Project Tags" you can also check here too. 19:01, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I just wanted to see what you think. I'm kinda working on Rosetail myself as a personal project. <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  04:37, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

What Can I do?
Hello all! I was wondering if anyone had ideas on what I could do. I haven't been on in a while and for that I apoligize. Thanks! ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 18:44, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

You can comment on articles and/or nominate some. See the FAQ for further detail. 18:55, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Join ._.
I'm really surprised it took me this long to join. I figured I ought to ^.^' So..can I? :3 20:18, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

xD Yep! Please check out the FAQ! 20:21, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hi I want to join project characters is that okay? Im just wondering, it sounds really interesting and I really want to contribute. If its ok may I join? Please respond.

I love tigerheart 03:10, August 7, 2011 (UTC)Tigerheart

Yes, you can join :) Please see the FAQ. 03:13, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lightningpaw ~ Silver Nomination
So, he only appears in CP, and I've expanded that section as much as possible, and the one and only quote related to him doesn't relate to him. Comments? 17:19, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I'll add the quote. 17:22, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It says "he give him the gift..." I'll fix it. And can you explain more when Crookedstar feels that the world is huge? I don't know, the phrasing feels kind of strange there. 17:27, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I took the phrasing off the book, so it should be fine. 17:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Could you flesh it out a bit more using more words? 21:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

What I meant was in the last sentence, "He gives him the life of humility, and Crookedstar feels that the world is huge and that RiverClan is only a tiny speck in the whole world," you used the word "and" twice so it seems kind of weird there. 22:30, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It is possible to use a word twice in a sentence, you know. I'll change it anyway to make you feel better. ;P 16:54, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 18:27, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

I feel better now. XD 19:20, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, on the CBV list. 16:45, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hattie ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 17:58, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the last sentence of FQ. 18:10, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand TDH? 21:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's important to expand, but the last sentence in The Darkest hour deosn't seem to relate to Hattie very much, so I think it's ok to delete it. Also, I got quite a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but I think that's all. 22:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Mossleaf ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 18:07, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe flesh it out, using a bit more words? 21:50, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

What Icestorm said. XD Other than that, he's a very minor character, so I don't see anything else you cna do. 01:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can't expand much, really, since he's so minor. 16:49, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join?
Can I join, please? Dayheart 18:18, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, please see the FAQ for any questions! ;) 18:19, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish ~ Silver Nomination
I think she's ready, but I think we could try to find some more qoutes if possible. I think the history is expanded as much as it could, seeing as she doesn't even have a description. Oh and sorry about the big link, it wouldn't let me "tag" it. Comments? 23:17, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I linked it for you ;3 Possibly flesh out the first paragraph of Crookedstar's Promise, make it a bit more detailed. 23:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded it alot, and got to quotes, taking out the main quote and putting in a different one. I detailed it with saying stuff like "Her eyes glitterd nervously" How does it look now? 15:58, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find another quote? It would be nice, but if you can't find one, don't worry about it. Also, you're not supposed to use direct quotes in the history, so in paragraph three of the history, I suggest you rephrase that. 19:31, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks SquirrelFlame, I think I can find 1 more quote :) 19:39, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Added another quote, so how does it look now? 00:42, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great, but the last quote doesn't really show her personality. Maybe you should use the one quote she says in the CP manga? 16:55, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Your quotes have too many quote marks. I'll go fix that. 19:49, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

@Mistystar I put the manga qoute in!

@SquirrelFlame Thanks :P Ok, so anything else?

Remember to sign with four tides. Her page looks great! Good job Sweetflower! 15:51, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add a reference for the trivia. 17:25, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Position
Can I be moved from elder to warrior, please? Thanks:) 00:27, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Done! ;) 00:32, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleface - Silver Nomination
Hey all! I really want to do Brindleface. I just don't know what needs to be done. Thanks! ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:49, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Try to find some quotes, apart from the main quote, and try to flesh out Fire and Ice if possible same with Forest Of Secrets. Also try to detail her history throughout when she is living. It even says at the top of the page "This Article Needs Improvements. See Brindlefaces's Talk Page for details. 23:53, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Find at least 3 good quotes for the quote section, and expand Forest of Secrets. 17:17, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Try to expand all of the Original Series except for Rising Storm. Read through the article looking for grammar/spelling mistakes. 19:54, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lakeshine ~ Silver Nomination
I'm expanding the history right now and adding in quotes. I'm determined to not give up on this nomination. 13:29, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

The history looks great, but you don't have a main quote or a quote section... ` 17:00, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I caught a few grammar and flow issues, but I think that's all. 19:59, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

What all needs to be done for it to be silver? I'll help if you guys need it. 00:39, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

See here for what makes an article ready for silver. 01:49, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to add in the quote section and the main quote later Mistystar. :) 02:28, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I added the quote section (will add quotes later) and expanded the history. I'm still trying to see if I can expand it more. How does it look now though? And I can't really find any quotes that would fit as her main quote. 15:06, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

History looks great! Why don't you list the quotes here and we can decide which would be a best main quote? Keep looking for a really good one, though. 17:15, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Just a Notice
Hey guys. :3 I'd just want to tell you guys that I might not be as active for the next week or so. My laptop broke and I'm looking for a new one. I can come on from my family's laptop and computer, but they're slow and I have a limited time on them. xP I probably won't be editing too much since it's kinda slow. So this is just a heads up. 16:06, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Join Request
Hi! I was wondering if I could join? :D

<font color="#00ffff" style="background:black;">Starpaw <font color="#0099ff"> Apprentice of MidnightClan 03:16, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yep! Please read the FAQ to learn what we do in this project. 18:59, August 12, 2011 (UTC)