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Jackdaw's Cry (Star) ~ Approved
Yay. :3 Comments?

Define/darken the shading, and could you smudge it so that it flows with the fur? Those are some really amazing eyes. 16:39 Thu Jun 12

Smudging the shading isn't mandatory. =/ Idk what everyone's thing is with smudging but not everyone does it

No, that's not it. I can clearly see that the shading is smudged, so I'm only suggesting that it be smudged in the way of the fur. ;) 18:07 Thu Jun 12

Add the texture. It's a bit faint, but it is there. 19:12, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay then. It doesn't look smudged to me but whatever. o.O

Re-up ~ I thought nobody would see I smudged the shading a little bit, but oh well. XD I'm not really good at smudging shading so I added a very thin layer of highlight and smudged that, but it's hard to see on a black cat. And Bbun, what do you mean with texture? Sorry, I'm from the Netherlands so my English may not be really good. ^_^"

As in, the dark black "stripes" on his rogue. Those are texture. Please add it ^^;;. 18:16, June 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Hope I got what you meant. :3

Darken and define the texture. I can barely see it. 14:10, June 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ I tried, but I don't know if it's better now. :/

Darken the opacity on the texture - it should be slightly darker than the base coat. 18:56, June 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Tried again. I also added a little bit more highlight. I don't know if I do it good 'cause I never worked with texture on cats before.

Define the texture on the face, chest, and legs. 17:39, June 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Sorry that I'm often a bit late with it. ^^'

If he's a black cat he should have a black nose, unless his other chararts are like that. 17:14, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Made his nose black.

Define the shading some, and smudge the texture a bit to match the rogue. 18:23, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Yup.

Darken/define the shading summore and this will be good. 14:14, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Darkened the shading. I hope the edges aren't too dark. ^^

Actually, blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch, below the head, and a teeny bit on the shoulder/chest area. 14:12, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the texture jusssst a tiny bit. 17:59 Thu Jul 3

Re-up ~ Blurred the mentioned places. c: And Hawk, do I have to lighten the highlights or the texture stripes?

The texture. A slide of 5 or 6 on the opacity bar should do the trick. 22:43 Fri Jul 4

Is the nose pure black? I think it has to be, since he's a black cat. Daaamn, this is really pretty and I love it *.*

I tried with the texture, but I don't see any difference. :/ The texture stripes are already quite transparent, so it's hard to lighten it. And the nose is black with thin layer of highlight. Do I have to remove the highlight?

Nope. I didn't know it was a highlight. It's fine as it is, and we're gonna go CBA on this because it's super pretty and I like it, and I think it's a job well done.

Thank you! ^^ sorry for the late comments...

Approved.

Shy Fawn (Q) - Approved
Ding. Despite me color picking, the color still feels off... so I'm gonna play with that.

Re-uploaded. Color-picked again.

hm, it doesn't look too far off but I think it's the shading color on the sharpclaw, it looks like maybe a black or very very dark red, almost black, shading x3 23:27, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

I really don't want to use black on this, though. Using black on a color like this makes it look green (like the other one is starting to look) and I think the sharpclaw needs tweaking for flat shading anyways.. idk, but I really don't want to tweak the color on the shading. I thought tint didn't have to match? idk

oh oops, I didn't mean for you to change anything, you just said that the color feels off, and I wanted to help? sorry, I didn't clarify 23:32, June 27, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, it's fine. I thought you were asking me to change it. I color picked from like four different areas on both the queen and the sharpclaw and they all gave me around this color. I'll use black, but only if it looks that off.

define don't darken the shading on the face and her front left leg 16:20, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading on the chest. 14:11, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 20:07, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

So sorry, but can you blur the shading near the belly slightly, so it doesn't look blotchy? 10:09 Sun Jul 6

If I blur it, I'll get told to define it again. It's actually fairly blurred as it is, and it doesn't appear blotchy to me at all.

Gotta agree with Skye here; it doesn't look blotchy. Back to a CBA, I guess? 14:57, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Approved.

Featherwhisker (Star) ~ Approved
He needed a starclan image. Colorpicked from his Medicine cat image. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:53, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Next time, please wait until someone archives your previous image before posting a new one. As for this one, define the shading and darken it.

Don't the whiskers need to be longer? Brick 10:23, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe just a few pixels longer. 15:36, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Made whiskers a few more pixels longer and darkened/defined the shading. Better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:42, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define and add some depth to the shading. Nice! 14:16, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-up. '''Defined and added depth to his shading. is that better? and thank you, Bbun :).~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:56, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and forelegs. 19:04 Wed Jul 2

Re-up. Defined the light on his tail and forelegs. is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:53, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, could you perhaps darken his base pelt by about a shade or two? This appears to be slightly lighter than his MC. Other than that, this is looking pretty stellar. Well done, Breezeheart. =)

Re-uploaded. It wasnt his base coat; it was his highlights making him look a bit paler. I turned the opacity down a bit. Is that better? And thank you Snow; that means alot. :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Yup! That looks much better, dear. =3 Just define the shading on his visible paws, and I think this'll be pretty good to go.

Re-uploaded. Defined the shading on his front paws. Thank you :3--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:17, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

As I said, let's go CBA with this. It looks really really good and I know the CBA is well-deserved.

Sorryy to interrupt, but just define his facial shading some, since I can see a bit leaking from his face, and this can go back on CBA. 14:02, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined his facial shading, and removed the shading that was leaking away from his face.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 19:51, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Back to a CBA, then? 19:53, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Approved.