Talk:Firestar/Archive 2

Older:

 * Needs citation for eye color Says it twice in Firestar's Quest
 * The citation needs to be in Into the Wild - Quailflight  11:52, May 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * Needs citation for Lionheart and Tigerclaw mentoring him  Uh, Into the wild
 * The citation will come from Into the Wild/Fire and Ice, but page number is still being determined. - Quailflight  11:52, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * On page 56 on ITW, it states that he is unassigned a mentor, and that Lionheart and Tigerclaw will share responsibility for his mentorship... Jmiles The forums guy! 04:41, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
 * Done! Jmiles The forums guy! 19:25, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Current:

 * History should be checked over for verb tense, flow, and clarity. I did some but more can be done if needed. Shadowstar ^^ 18:23, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
 * Perhaps shorten OS sections if possible, the page is quite long
 * Most of the P3 sections could be expanded.
 * Needs Citations in Trivia category for being long-haired. It has been removed until someone can find a citation.
 * Needs more quotes to show his personality