Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 107

Barley(KP) - Approved
Comments? I really don;t like this one. owo 01:26, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

If I'm not mistaken, on the loner image, the white parts are tinted blue, but I could be wrong ouo 02:01, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading - and define it on the face. Also possibly lighten it on the white? 13:37, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading a bit. 15:56 Thu Aug 8

Re-uploaded Redid the shading and I'm much more pleased. 01:26, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred a tad more. 16:05, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:32, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 00:27, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Approved.

Flamepelt (W) - Approved
scarly loves her days off with wifi....and Flamepelt too, I suppose. Comments? 03:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit? They look lighter compared to the elder. Nice work, Scar! 03:31, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:59, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think that there are as many stripes on her his elder, and the stripes are a tad thicker on his elder, wonderful work! 17:45, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste this side > of the tail. Nice work!--Ambershine223 (talk) 21:46, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 22:04 Thu Jul 25 2013

Re-uploaded Yup 01:22, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

The bit of waste is still there.-- 12:30, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:07, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Personal preference, but do you think you can give him more defined stripes? As is, the stripes almost look like texture. 17:22 Mon Jul 29 2013

Maybe add some more depth to the shading. If not, cool with me, as this is a neat image ouo 02:42, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 6:21 Sun Aug 4 2013

Re-uploaded Yeah, still working. Internet at camp's been a butt lately... >.< 01:20, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Can you add some more depth to the shading, it still seems hard to see. 21:35, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:02, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? This is actually quite neat looking. .o.

There is some shading left off the back heel. Sorry to interrupt! 05:45 Sat Aug 10

It looks fine to me? o.O I'm going to continue the CBA, since I honestly cannot see what you mean.

The purple tint doesn't really seem to go well with the base pelt color, in my opinion. Could you try lightening the shading or changing it to a more browner/redder color? 06:17, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

I agree, but I think it looked good when it was black imho. 16:39 Sat Aug 10

Waste <--- to the left of the neck. 21:39, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Dullen and redden the earpink, it's quite conspicuous right now. And by the shading being of the heel, I meant this.. 20:06 Sun Aug 11

The earpink is fine, as it can be that color with red/ginger cats, too. But I agree with the neck/heel shading owo  22:06, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This shading is driving me nuts...   02:34, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? 6:00 Wed Aug 14 2013

Sorry, but define paw shading? 23:52 Wed Aug 14

It's fine, imho. CBA will continue.

Approved.

Finchkit (Star) ~ Approved
Ugh I dun like how this turned out 06:19, 07/17/2013

O I just noticed I forgot to change the date from my previous reservation. I'm not entirely sure if that affects this considering it's like a minute after that I noticed and I'm changing it? Someone tell me whether or not this gets declined? /shot 06:24, 07/17/2013

Could you blur the stripes just a tad to match her other image? 03:48, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Just lighten the shading juuussst a smidge? If not, that's okay. 20:38, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Shading needs lightened, and blurred a touch. 2:01 Fri Jul 19 2013

Thicken the stripes just by a pixel or two, and define the pale belly. 00:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:09, 07/20/2013

The black shading is throwing the color off, could you tint it a different color perhaps? 00:07, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Waste < this side of the chest. --Ambershine223 (talk) 21:43, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:45, 07/27/2013

Define the earpink on the << ear, as I can't see it. This is really cute Shimmer! 02:41, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a tad on the back/midsection area? 00:26, August 1, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

I think the shading's fine '^^ Still working? 03:08, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

I think both the shading and earpink are fine, I can see the earpink. Yeah sorry for not keeping up with this very well, I've been busy as of late. x.x 22:37, 08/3/2013

I think the earpink on --> side is on the wrong side of the ear. x3 22:39, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Looks great! The >> eye looks like its a lazy eye so maybe let it point the other way? <span style="">04:56 Sun Aug 4

Couldn't the earpink be on either side, though? I thought it worked for both, but sorry if I'm wrong >.<  13:38, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded No, it can't work for either side, nor was it on the wrong side. The color was just really close to the pelt color and it made it appear that way since the earpink layer was under the shading layer. I changed the earpink color, hopefully that's fixed it. I hate the eyes on this blank x.x <span style="">14:21, 08/4/2013

I think the ear pink works on either side of --> ear. I know when I made Mosskit's alt, I had it on the other side, and it looked fine... I think it's artist's choice on these blanks, just like the loners.

Quite a few days without comments, so Imma CBA this.

Sorry, but shoulder stripes don't curve with the shoulder. <span style="">20:02 Sun Aug 11

They appear to be fine to me. ^^;;

I honestly still think the shading could be tinted more like in the kit image and made a little lighter  21:16, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The tint matches almost exactly now, and I lightened it a bit. Not sure if changes are showing. <span style="">12:07, 08/13/2013

I'm not sure if you want to, it could be just me, but can you define the nosepink?

I'd prefer not to, since it's the same color as the kit's. <span style="">02:21, 08/14/2013

Looks fine to me. CBA? <span style="">6:01 Wed Aug 14 2013

Approved.