Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 131

Darkstripe (Alt Ro) - Approved
silver and black tabby aka I stole Dreamcatcher's coloring.

Define the shading a little bit? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:10, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps make the pupil bigger? It kind of gives off the appearance of being just horizontal. ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  09:11, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

This is what I usually do with my eyes, and the style is my choice, so I'd rather not change that. The white itself is one pixel, and then I use different colors for anywhere from three to six pixels, depending on what I feel like at the time. I defined the shading, though.

Smoothen out the stripes maybe? kind look rugged and shaky. (Or is it supposed to be like that?)

Can you define the leg shading a bit? I love the stripes. How did you make them? 04:01, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the shading because it bothered me. The rugged and shaky look for the stripes is supposed to be like two of my other silver tabbies, so I don't really want to smooth them out. I smudged them a bit more, but I'm not going to blur them or anything.

Eh, not to sound rude, but it looks like there's a square on his front because of the shading. He also looks a tad flat. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:01, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

I don't get what you mean???? Explain please?

Eh ignore the square thingy. I still think he looks a little flat. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:10, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Did you add any facial shading? If you did, could you define it just a bit? If not though, ignore this :) 07:55, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I defined the facial shading (or the head w/e), but I fail to see where he looks flat. Mind pointing it out, since I can't see it?

I'm going to take a guess and say that this is the square he is talking about. I outlined it. I don't know- that's the only square that I noticed. EDIT: I just use "he" to be used in general to someone whose gender I don't know. ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  16:27, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Please please respect the fact that I'm a girl -_- Also, it's mainly flat on the body, yes, the square was what Pinely is talking about, but I think it's fine now. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:47, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not gonna define the shading much more- overly defined shading on these looks disgusting. Or at least my shading looks disgusting.

I'm really sorry, it does kind of seem like he has a square on his flank now. Maybe thicken the shading instead of defining it? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:33, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'd rather not thicken the shading, honestly. and I still can't see the square- the shading's actually pretty smooth there without the stripe layer- are you sure you're not confusing the stripes and my shading?

Nah, it's fine, there is really no "square" ^^ I think my sis just knda got tired and can't see properly so she dozed off. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 13:07, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 00:59, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Approved.

Gorsestar (K) - Approved
Gah, it's been way too long since I've done a charart. So busy. Anyway, here's Gorsekit. I had a lot of fun with this one, I think it turned out pretty well. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:47, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten up the shading? It's kind of looking like really dark stripes. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 02:51, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:56, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Think you could define the face shading a bit? 03:40, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

Tweaked face shading, and the chest stripes to try and get them to match better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:03, January 6, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the shading looks like stripes. Perhaps tint the shading? You don't have to, just suggesting. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:26, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

It is tinted. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by it looking like stripes. Would you mind elaborating a little? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:35, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Well apparently to me the shading /looks/ the same color as the stripes, so I find it a bit hard to tell the shading and stripes apart. But if you say it's tinted I guess it's fine, blame my poor eyesight O.O <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:51, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the shading is tinted red, like his leader image, at least as well as I was able to figure without the original file. I'm not sure how to fix that similar to stripes issue. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:34, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe tint it even more red? XD Don't if it'll ruin the image, TBH I have little idea on how to tint stuff. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:02, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

No, the shading tint is fine as it is. Making it more red will clash with the colors. <span style="">14:30 Sat Jan 10

CBA?

Approved.

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) - Approved
This was the challenge I was searching for! Dark coloured, long-furred tabby! Everything is from the kittypet image. I also looked at the apprentice and warrior image and noticed that there was some not really minor differences with the tabby stripes, like a stripe down the tail was on the kittypet, but not on the apprentice or warrior. Can someone check that? --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:55, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload forgot the SC part. --Stealthfire star (talk) 08:01, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, there's a stripe on the warrior's tail (I made it and the kittypet), but it's like really super thin. Also, as a note, the main image that should be matched is the warrior, as that was done first. They can be tweaked if it's that bad, but it's not important right now, so don't go nominating it (I'd want them anyways because I have the files). Also please don't upload another file- it's a waste of space and I can just rename it next time.

Could you define the ear pink? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 08:22, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Alright, I see. --Stealthfirestar (talk) 08:48, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Damnit i wanted this.. you beat me to it lmao. He looks great. =) 08:58, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload thankyou! :) --Stealthfire star (talk) 09:04, January 7, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the stripes and tail shading a bit? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:29, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sure. Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:39, January 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.