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Swoop (CG) ~ For Approval
I haven't done a charart in like - 5 years please be gentle. 00:41, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

What are you talking about? This is amazing!! Regardless, I think the ginger is too neon compared to the queen. 01:29, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded aah thank you! I tried my best to dull the colour. 03:05, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the body. Nice work Echo!Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you!! Hopefully this looks a bit better. 21:14, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There's pinkish tint near her right cheek.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:55, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

The top of the shoulder shading and the outside of the haunch seem to be a little over-defined, sorry I know that's annoying. xD  H A W K  F I R E  23:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad on the front leg closest to us 00:44, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Potato, can you redline where the pink is? I can't catch onto it well since I shaded with red. 01:57, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Um.. I use a tablet, not a computer, can someone else show Echo what I mean?Heyoitpotater (talk) 03:05, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I think it's just shading tint, nothing that looks different Malina457 (talk) 14:36, November 4, 2018 (UTC)malina

Yeah, I agree. There's no pink tint on the cheek from what I can see.  H A W K  F I R E  15:26, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Hate to be broken record, but the orange still doesn't quite match. The queen is more saturated than what you have here. Maybe this will help? And there need to be some stripes over her chest. 15:44, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I just saw Shinx (the OA of the queen/kit-mother image) on Discord a few days ago. I could try and ask her if she has the file for the queen if you'd like. Maybe that would help in this situation? ​​

Yes please ;; Colour picking has been difficult and I can't seem to find a medium between being too rustic or too neon. 22:31, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Jag (CG) ~ For Approval
Gosh, the mud was a challenge! I'm still not sure if i even did that well on it, but I tried. Ah well, I like challenges! I'm just gonna get this up before I ruin it more by fiddling. ^^; SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Define the shading a bit. 03:33, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Can you fix the pupils a bit? They might just look weird on my screen but they look a bit off with them being pointed to the ground. This is super cute btw and you did great on the mud! 03:37, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed eyes. And tysm, Echo. ^^ SquidwardPlays 03:54, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Is there a red or pink tint on the shading or something? It kind of sticks out, and I'm not sure if it goes well with the rest of Jag. Also, light source? Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:15, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

There is the tint as Shadow said.. can you make the mud on the tail brighter? I can barely see it. Heyoitpotater (talk) 15:47, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Messed around with the mud on the tail a bit, is it any better? I also completely redid the shading. SquidwardPlays 10:43, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I can't see shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:01, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? SquidwardPlays 11:07, November 3, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Yes! This looks wonderful. The only thing I really see is the haunch shading looks kind of clumped in one spot, can you expand it to the belly and the bottom of the haunch more?  H A W K  F I R E  15:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded I THINK I fixed the haunch shading. SquidwardPlays 11:19, November 4, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Night (CG) - For Evaluation
This is probably an unpopular opinion but I enjoyed doing the mud. Also, yes, I'll fix the shading. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:19, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and smudge the mud a little bit. It looks kind of clump in some areas, like the front leg and the flank.  H A W K  F I R E  13:30, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups nvm I don't like mud now Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:02, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. And the mud needs to be smudged a tad more. And is it me, or does her eyes make her look like an ailen from space? You don't have to change the eyes by the way.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:06, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups that's meant to be eyelids, because eyes and earpink are my weak spots. Also the shading is now officially as dark as it can get. Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 01:05, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

The ear pink is now super dark on the right side and bright on the left side. Can you make them the same color?  H A W K  F I R E  03:42, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I think that's because the shading is covering the ear pink, Hawkey ^^ Regardless, could you add some more shading to the haunch and tail? I can see where you defined the shading on the face, chest, legs and stomach, but I can't see any shading on the haunch or tail. 15:37, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

My bad! Disregard my previous comment. ^^  H A W K  F I R E  19:00, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 19:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Could you define the lighter areas? I'm not seeing any here at all. ​​​​​

Could you define the mud or maybe sharpen it? I'm having trouble seeing it. 02:42, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups oof Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 12:58, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail and the foreleg closest to us. 21:51, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

re-ups Darkshadowthe1 (talk) 22:09, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading on the paws, tail and chest.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:18, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Alright, this may just be me, but I personally feel like the mud is now a little too intense, if that makes sense. I feel like it might've been sharpened up too much, and maybe could do with having less of the mud in general, but that's just what I think. If you think the mud's fine, you don't have to do a thing, since the thing about how bright/intense it is, could also just totally be my screen unless someone else sees it that way too. I just was thinking it so I thought I'd point it out. SquidwardPlays 02:37, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Talon (CG) - For Approval
Wow, love the new blanks! There's some things I need to correct (like the overly dark stomach/haunch shading) but I just wanted to get it up for now.  H A W K  F I R E  23:21, November 3, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe define the lightsource as well? Malina457 (talk) 00:23, November 4, 2018 (UTC)malina

Could you taper the stripe some? 00:41, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

I do agree with Malina and Vec, can you lower the opacity of the shading when you fix the light source?Heyoitpotater (talk) 01:27, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Also I added more mud :3  H A W K  F I R E  03:26, November 4, 2018 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 00:17, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but could you define the lighter areas on the image? I'm mainly only seeing shading throughout the main part of the body and it sort of throws off the pattern. Since I'm also having issues seeing the stripes, I think perhaps tweaking the areas without shading and expanding them might solve this.

I can darken the stripes to make them more visible, but the dark shading on the <-- side of the body was intentional. I wanted to try a new shading style where it seems like most of the cat's body is hidden in shadows. His other images are very dark as well.  H A W K  F I R E  00:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I realize that, but I can see the pattern on those images. I can't with this one and the shadows obscure it a lot more than they would on other images. ​​​​​​

I personally think its fine. I can see everything well on my screen. 01:05, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I can see the pattern perfectly fine. Make sure all colors are the same though. 01:10, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but others (including myself) have gotten the exact same kinds of comments and have been made to change things, so I believe it should also apply here. It's not right to allow one thing to pass, while forcing almost everyone else to change their image. The shading does obscure the pattern here and I can't see it at all. ​​​​​​

'''Reuploaded. '''Hopefully you think this looks better.  H A W K  F I R E  01:31, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I asked you to define the light- did you? I'm not seeing that in the file history. ​​​​​

I did, but I didn't change a lot because I really like how it is right now. I can see the pattern just fine on both my computer and my phone.  H A W K  F I R E  22:07, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Where did you define it, then? Because I am not seeing any changes to the light in the file history, and it's not fair to anyone else in the past who has gotten made to change their images for this exact same reason. I'm also seeing a lot of miscolored pixels where said shading is. ​​​​

The miscolored pixels are my version of the mud, like it's mud splatters. David and several others have the same kind of splattered mud style.  H A W K  F I R E  22:22, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

If anyone else genuinely has a problem with my shading, which is supposed to be artist's choice and matches the other images very well, please comment.  H A W K  F I R E  22:24, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - For Approval
all colors are the same, this one just lacks the excessive amount of shading his other images have, so it looks lighter. ​​​​​

Maybe define the face shading? I love this Malina457 (talk) 02:41, November 5, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Do you have a specific spot you'd like for me to define the shading? ​​​​

Adding to Malina's critique by asking you to define shading everywhere because I cannot see it.Heyoitpotater (talk) 04:03, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Alright, maybe this'll work? Definitely not used to these blanks yet, but I really do like them... ​​​

might be nitpicky but I think there wouldn't be light on the chest with this source. or at least the there'd be shading where the chest fur lineart is if u get what I mean 21:50, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I still can't see shading except on the ears and tail, can you possibly add more mud.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:13, November 5, 2018 (UTC)

I honestly think the amount of mud is good. I can see the shading fine too. Maybe it's your screen??

00:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Spirekit (k) ~ For Approval
that's nice.

00:03, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

can you darken the black a bit? It looks more of a gray to me? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 00:44, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Define shading.Heyoitpotater (talk) 01:22, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Hopkit (SC) (Ki) ~ For Approval
00:03, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

could you define shading just a tad, this is lovely. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 00:44, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (Star) - For Approval
The shading is hideous cause I need to fix something with my tablet, but I finally get to use this. 01:04 Tue Nov 6

This looks gorgeous! Could you soften the speckles only a tad? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:05, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:08 Tue Nov 6

Blazepaw (A) ~ For Approval
my son is too important to me. 01:54, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

He's adorable! Maybe this is just my screen, but Blazepaw almost looks muddy along the whites of his legs and belly. Otherwise this is so good! You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   patience.

I believe that's the shading. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:58, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Storm! ^^ And yes, that's the shading. Would you like me to smooth it or lighten it or... 01:59, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Perhaps just lighten it a little? I'm very new to this whole approval process, so you don't have to take my advice. You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   patience.

Reups :P Nah, your gut was on point. Never be afraid to mention something. 02:13, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Lighten it more.Heyoitpotater (talk) 02:16, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 02:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Flaxkit (K) ~ For Approval


This is my first one! :D Queen 02:25, November 6, 2018 (UTC) Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

define shading, this also need renamed to File:Flaxkit.kit.png <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 02:27, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

To add on a little bit, I can see no shading at all myself, so try to define it as much as you can while it keeping it looking good. This part is just an idea to try if you think it might work, but maybe try darkening. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:36, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

The shading should be darker now, if not, I'll have to see what I can do so that everyone can still see the design. The file name has been renamed. Queen 02:42, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  <font color="#cf242a">Que <font color="#df3d2b">enO <font color="#e46825">fTh <font color="#ed9522">isSh <font color="#f09f23">ip

Sunkit ~ For Approval
hi it me, this isn't the best but I do like the way it turned out. I'll probably add texture later on. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  02:31, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, added texture. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  02:37, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

This could totally just be my screen and if you think it's fine that's alright, but the earpink color kind of blends into the body color a little bit and is hard to see for me, but it may just be my screen messing up colors. If it's fine to you though, totally leave it! I just find it hard to distinguish the color of the pink to the body. I just thought i'd put it out there. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:40, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

I can see it just fine but if someone else comments on it, I'll totally darken it a bit. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  02:42, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Squidward. The ear pink is very hard to see. And since this is a brown and white tabby I think the color could stand to be less yellow and more brown. As it stands he looks like a golden and white tabby. On top of that, smooth out the shading everywhere.

It's a lighter brown, which I think is fine to use. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  02:55, November 6, 2018 (UTC)

I have to say that it still looks more gold than it does brown, and personally think that it could be changed a bit to look more brown, even if the color chosen was a lighter brown, this still looks gold. <font color="#660000" face="Segoe Script" >SquidwardPlays 02:57, November 6, 2018 (UTC)  Meming it up!

Shellpaw (App) ~ For Approval
ok this looks weird. i'll try and fix the pale stuff later