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Clawface (A) ~ For Approval
Splashpelt reserved it, but didn't put it up, and its past 2 weeks...so here it is. Comments? 00:28, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. 00:31, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. 00:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the shading on the haunch. Edit conflicts x.x 00:34, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Look at the innocent face on that evil'un. o3o If there is shading there, define it on the back paw furtherest away. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, there's no shading on that paw. I blurred the shading. Re-Uploaded. 00:52, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should give him a couple scars on his face. I know we normally assume that scars are obtained while a cat is a warrior, but considering his name... Well, yeah. Might just be me. 00:56, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Well, there isn't any proof, so I won't. Sorry, but it would probably just get removed, like Tornear's torn ear, because it was based on assumption based on the name. 01:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, for all we know, he could've gotten the warrior name Clawfoot. Can you blur the back shading a little? 03:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, there's a cite for his scars in his description. Tornear's ear was removed because there was no cite. 03:43, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

As an appentice though? It just said he was mentioned as being so-and-so's apprentice (I just skimmed quickly) 04:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. o3o Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 21:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not adding scars...sorry, but there isn't any proof. Like Ivy said, he wasn't mentioned having scars as an apprentice. Re-Uploaded. 23:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. 02:09, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink more 00:49, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I would make it a bit lighter to match his warrior charart... to me it kind of seems dark. 22:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The color is the same, but I was told to define shading, so I had to darken it a little. I got the colors from the warrior charart, though, so its fine. Re-Uploaded. 22:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. If you want to make it look lighter anyways and you have photoshop, you can do that by choosing a slightly light foreground color and using overlay with the paint bucket. 23:12, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the color is fine as it is. 23:40, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading a bit.  Pale  Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  00:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:50, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm leaving. Someone can take over. 23:58, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 23:59, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I have 3 projects already. 16:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over.17:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made him lighter because of his rouge image...but I'll change it back if anybody dislikes the colour. 18:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please change it back, the color doesn't really match either of his images now. It was fine before. And darken the shading a bit. 22:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:50, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. 02:35, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Mak ethe earpink less neon please. 19:08 Mon Jan 30

Re-Uploaded O.o I think I made it worse. Oh well..I'll just play with it for a bit see what happens xD..I personally think the earpink is fine but if anybody else wants me too I'll change it. 00:29, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading. ;D Sky Dovahkiin  08:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 17:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit. 01:38, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-Uploaded 00:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw away from us. ^^ Sky Dovahjerk  01:48, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading a tad. 04:50 Thu Feb 2

Re-Uploaded 01:46, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and blur the shading a bit more 06:05, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mak ethe earpink less neon. Purty! 18:35 Sun Feb 5

Re-Uploaded.. Changes not showing for the first time :/ 21:49, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. Other then that, I can find nothing wrong with this atm. 02:21, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

The overall shading seems somewhat blotchy. Smooth it out and blend it into the pelt. Feel free to disagree. 05:55, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Re-Uploaded I don't know if I made it better or worse. Changes will show soon..I hope. 16:31, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind-leg and tail, and smudge the ear pink  ~Pouncey!   <font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 02:14, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Any more comments? ^^ 01:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the haunch, and it should be ready. 21:24, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Well I tried -.- 00:09, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch/tail shading. 19:59, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:34, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

M'kay, I'm basically going to contradict the previous comments, but define the shading in some parts of the charart as it's almost invisible (most likely due to overblurring) and then (I would at least) start over with the back half of the charart (tail and haunch) as it's very inconsistent and splotchy. x3 Lot of work, but I know you can pull it through. :) 03:58, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, Cinder. Still working on this? 19:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Oyus Cloud..As you can see I just got a comment from Atelda so I'm working on that..01:49, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it my computer, or did you use the female blank? 16:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, hun, Clawface is decidedly male. 17:24, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Webfoot (A) ~ CBA
Fallow's reservation ran out, so I snatched this up. According to the category page, this is the last apprentice image needing to be redone (but there could be more without categories). Woo! Comments? 15:36, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps make the stripes fade out a bit more like the elder and I believe the nose should be grey. Brilliant job like always, Shellheart. 00:17, January 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * I did this to match his warrior image, as the elder image is on the redo list. 00:51, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The elder image shouldn't be on the redo list, the warrior is getting tweaked by simply putting shorthair lineart over the old image, so the elder one doesn't need to be redone. I'm removing it now, so could you make this match the elder now? 05:00, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I was the one who was supposed to do that, I forgot to post it XD Problem solved. 05:06, January 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * Aww, dang it. The warrior image looked so much better than the elder image. (sigh) Fine, I'll do it. 15:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, someone else can take over. I just don't have it in me to copy that pattern when I like this one so much. 20:24, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can i steal this back? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 20:28, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 20:46, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You workin' on this Pouncey? 20:40, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yah, but I'm having computer issues. It'll be posted by Saturday. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I changed to title since you re-uploaded. Blur the shading on the haunch. 17:26, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

My computer still shows Shelly's version o_o Reuploaded... <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 19:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

There it is! Lighten the earpink so it matches the elder. 20:14, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fallow needed me to reupload for her, since she couldn't edit. 02:16, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a touch more 06:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more. <span style="">08:33, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

Reuploaded <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, and I think it might be ready. Lovely Fallow! 22:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the legs darker and the stripes slightly longer. Make the stripes fade out more at the ends and sharpen the stripe by the eye. <span style="">23:50 Mon Feb 6

Lighten the base color a little. This is gorgeous Fallow ^^ 06:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Fallow? 06:07, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lost the layers so i redid it. All the colors are fron the elder image. Comments? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 00:26, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes fade out more like the other images. 22:06, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit more. 02:13, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

All the colors are from his elder image Mountain o3o it just has shading on it. If someone else agrees I'll change it. I'll try to upload sometime today <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 21:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I agree. Shading or not, it's still too dark. And can you make the earpink less gray? 04:53, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 22:25, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There hasn't been any comments and whatnot for a while...so, CBA? 19:08, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (KP) ~ For Approval
She ate from the twoleg an' everyone else got one... Comments? <span style="">02:19 Sat Jan 28

Can you make that curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. 02:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back a little. 02:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading too, nice job! 06:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose color. 08:07, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">18:38 Sat Jan 28

The lineart for the neck looks a little bit too fat/blotchy. Try copying it from Nettlesplashs or Honeypaws. 19:53, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing, I don't feel like fiddling around with lineart. It never works out. Anyone who wants it, take it :P. <span style="">23:30 Sat Jan 28

I'll take it. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:19, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <span style="">02:27, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Darken the shadings please 17:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart out on the ---> side of her neck. 20:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg. 14:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg and the back a bit more. -- 02:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the shading to my liking. 12:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. 14:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <span style="">00:05 Thu Feb 2

Tone down the "highlights". 20:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I always use highlights. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:25, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Dont really see anything wrong. So, CBA-time! 02:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interupt, but can you blur the shading some more? -- 18:54, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  00:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

...continuing CBA? - 00:43, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but, blur the shading, even if you have to use the blur tool :3 <span style="">01:21 Sat Feb 4

Purple already said the shading is already blurred to the max. Another lead agreed with me on the chat that this looked okay. CBA agaain? 02:15, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Hate to interrupt, but can you darken it a bit to match the warrior image? 06:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

If I darken it more, it will look like black. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  12:44, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading just a tad bit more? And can you colorpick off the warrior image for the earpink? 16:17, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, with earpink straight from the warrior. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  22:58, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten/define the ear-pink a bit more? The color from the warrior might've been blurred over so much that the main color had been smudged into the black. Feel free to change the shade a bit. 06:02, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit more? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:57, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Whoa....this is great, but, in my view....Plumwillow was never even seen at the Twoleg nest. We don't really have any evidence that she was, and even though she may have gone with the other cats, it doesn't mean that she actually took any food. 18:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Quail, look at the article: "Afterwards, Plumwillow is seen with Birdpaw, Honeypaw, Sandypaw, and Nettlesplash getting food from the elderly Twoleg woman". Anyway, add the curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. This is lovely, DJ. 22:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Are you sure, I don't want to argue, but I own the manga, and she isn't ever at the Twoleg nest. However, if you really don't agree Purplemoon can continue. 22:36, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. 06:09, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  20:52, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 22:39, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for inturtupting, but can yuo make the skin lineart curve like: ( that instead of the sking just going down straight like | that. <span style="">22:54 Sun Feb 12

Yo, Purple, I think you're allowed one image for approval. If I'm not mistaken... you have Ice and this up. 23:21, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think Paleh told me one time that you can have a loner and something else up. 02:15, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

You misunderstood Mountain, I said you can have an apprentice and a loner up, as the old rule for the apprentices still applies, that you can have two chararts up as long as one is an apprentice. Neither of your images are apprentices however, do you'll have to withdraw one, sorry. 07:01, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sigh, I'll keep Ice. Someone else can have this. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:55, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do it. any way Im Baccckk! >:D  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave! 00:38, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay all colors are from the warrior. Comments? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 01:18, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Curve the neck in like this: ( I love this. 01:26, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't curve it all the way so...better? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 01:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yep. Now thicken it by a pixel? 02:19, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 20:00, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't thicken it to much but I did thicken it at certian spots. Comments? Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 01:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  11:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

'Reuploaded There. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 02:48, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 06:22, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave! 02:57, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink some more? Other then that, this looks great. :3 03:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 04:58, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (Lo) - CBA
Here she is. My first Charart in a long time. Comments? 17:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Whole image lineart is blurred, redone it please ,17:43,January 30,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to do it without redoing the image totally. 17:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little? And on chat last night, we agreed Brook should be either tweaked or redone becase she needs more stripes on her body. On her back leh leg and face especially. Would you be fine with doing that? :) Great work by the way 18:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart's blurred too. 19:23, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The ear-pink is in the wrong side of the ear where we can see it (edit conflicts! How dare it!) 19:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, that was me with the conflicts. Changes not showing. I think the earpink should be forward. Just looks more natural to me. 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and thicken the lineart one pixel at the torn ear. 04:03, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Please say what parts need to be blurred. That would really help. 15:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Try matching the stripes with the warrior version, as in, less smudging, and thicker stripes. Also make the shading more noticable while not overdoing it. So far, nice work! 00:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Atelda, I told her she could change the stripes because on chat we agreed Brook needed more stripes. 02:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you have the smudging go in the direction of her fur a little more and darken the shading? 03:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I love swirled tabbies, which is why I chose this design. Changes not showing. 15:36, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

The fur smudging still isn't going in the direction of the fur. And this actually has less stripes than the other images, so add more. They also look kinda unnatural, like they're paintbrush strokes, not stripes. And try looking at a reference of a swirled tabby to make it more realistic. And if her stripes are gonna be redone anyways, there's no need to keep the color of the other images, so can you make the base coat less ginger? 17:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:30, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner, smudge them, and change the color of the main pelt color and stripes to brown. Right now it looks red. 00:56, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. It's weird. It shows a previous one. Hmmm. 16:05, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it a lot? It's too dark right now. And the stripe pattern still doesn't look very realistic, it looks like brush strikes instead of stripes. 16:23, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

The very first tabby style you uploaded was good. You might want to go back to that style. But instead of rounded point ends, make them narrow out into points a bit (if that makes sense) 03:04, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, her prey-hunter was redone. You'll have to change to stripes. 15:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? 08:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, please. 22:26, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week since this was last uploaded. Declining this and any user without a current project may take over if they wish. 02:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ooh, I'll take over~ I've always wanted to do one of Brook's images. XD 03:44, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Though it may not look like it, the stripe match exactly from the preyhunter. Oblivion sent me the xcf cause it's hard t see through the mud. Comments? 16:27, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a bit :3 Beautiful <3 02:17, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - What on earth...? I could have sworn I reuploaded this..... Huh, I must be losing it. XD Sorry for the wait. And thanks Mounty. :) 15:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmmm, Cloudy likes this. Cloudy shall CBA said image. So, CBA? 19:10, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) ~ CBA
First loner image and first image for approval made on GIMP. I love GIMP now though. Any way, here he is! Comments? 19:19, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and tone down the highlights. Excellent! 19:21, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I swear, one more edit conflict and i shall lose it. Any way, i gave him the wrong eye color (don't ask how) So I fixed that also. Comments? 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. This is lovely daddy! <span style="">19:41 Mon Jan 30

Re-uploaded.   I have been discovered! Oh noes! Pshaw, comments? 19:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar some more and make it the same colour as the earpink. 20:50, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nyeh, scar. Your lucky i have the .xcf file Comments? 21:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Pshaw, shading is annoying right now. Any way, comments? 22:33, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more... 18:27, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar stand out. I also don't think it should be so shoop da whoopy. Make it straighter :3 19:16, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. 00:27, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Not half bad, Rain. This is looking excellent. 19:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Cloudy. 18:48, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar thicker and brighter. 18:50, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing, and when they do, i just gotta say ew. 19:09, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the scar a bit more. It looks a bit paintbrushy 06:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ew still. 19:23, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail and define the haunch and shoulder highlights 04:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, make the scar a bit thinner and smudge it less. Otherwise great job ^^ 21:12, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It wasn't smudged but alright. Any way, thanks ^.^ 19:29, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur highlights.

Re-uploaded. 19:37, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar a little more <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 03:01, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:13, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:14, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

The scar looks over-blurred and too dark. Try something like I did with Snowtuft, ask me if you want to know how I did it  03:25, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, considering the fact that this cat has long fur, the most he'd probably have there is scar fur unless the scar was sticking wayyyy out, so this looks fine. CBA? 17:29, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner image! I'm in love with this <333 &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 19:34, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are spotz not colored in and can you blur the ear-pink more and add depth to the eyes and define the shading more? 19:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this File:Mist (Lo).loner.png, please. =) It looks good~ 20:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink. I think Mist was my second ever charart! *good times* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 21:30, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are a couple stray white pixles on the belly, the tail, the elbow and the hind leg 00:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

As this is a kit doing this image, I changed the heading. <span style="">03:04, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Well done Oakbreeze! This seems 85% complete to me...I will add you in as an apprentice now, and since I've evaluated this, this is now Up For Approval. 03:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Oakbreeze? 05:58, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I completely forgot about this! I'm so sorry! I'll work on it right now. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:00, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:06, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Hun this is beautiful!! Just blur/smudge the earpink a bit ^^ 01:00, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I kind of gave up on blurring so I tried smudging. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 14:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the whole thing. 06:47, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. Nice. <span style="">05:10, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Please work on this, Oakbreeze. 04:53, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I like the shading and I can't smudge it anymore...&#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 13:08, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

How are you smudging the earpink? Cause I know it can be smudged more in almost every program I've heard being used, so.... And I'm sorry, but the shading's not fine. Please darken and define it. 15:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 18:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. You can't tell it apart from the main pelt color. 20:14, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing Cloudy :P &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 20:20, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights/non-shaded parts. 20:02, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink? Also, this looks darker than the kit image. Are you colorpicking from the shaded areas? o3o 20:41, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more. <span style="">01:21, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Cinders (Lo) ~ CBA
I love Cinders, comments? 21:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? Loverly. 21:58, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:01, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the transitions between the patches. 22:07, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:49, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the one on the belly so it's more consistent. 03:52, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you defne the earpink? I can barely see it. 16:45, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It might be your computer Bluestar. 21:25, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a tad? 01:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:53, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you brighten the earpink a tad like the queen? 05:29, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I took the earpink from the queen. 12:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. 19:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:11, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the parts where the patches meet a wee bit more. Cinder's looking very purty! ^^ 21:15, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think I see a couple of unfilled pixels on the front foreleg, by the belly. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 07:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Those are filled in... x3. 19:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

•_• xD Then blur the shading going along the back. Better be shading... <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 22:58, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It is Sky, don't worry xD. 00:59, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and round it; it looks kinda flat, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more 04:59, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:38, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste above the back, and perhaps blur the earpink a bit. Nice work! 22:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white paws. Very pretty ^^ 02:19, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:21, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with this. CBA? 00:01, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wait Ivy, sorry, there is waste around, erase it please. ,20:59,February 14,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Waste has nothing to do with the actual charart Leaf. I've seen images approved with waste on them. 22:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, that's true, but it did need to be pointed out. So continuing CBA where it left off since it was just waste. 10:31, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you make the smudgies more defined? Right now it looks like you smudged and then blurred them a lot: they're really fuzzy and look odd. Could you redraw the lines between the colours and re-smudge them? It just looks really messy. <span style="">02:42 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded I only blurred once. 12:06, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think the black needs to be lightened a tad. I'm having a really hard time telling it apart from the lineart. 04:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to wait for another opinion on that Skye. Personally I can see the lineart just fine. 12:35, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Cloudy. Lighten it just a bit. 15:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:41, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great! CBA? 17:30, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Egg (Lo) ~ For Approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:38, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the hightlinks and blur them ,11:16,February 3,2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is tinted green. Can you fix that? (you can try to get the xcf. file from the original artist) 20:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 17:31, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait o3o <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺<font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="4" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~<font color="orange" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">L <font color="yellow" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="green" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 20:43, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading less flat; It looks like there are only highlights. 02:45, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Start to do all thing please "Expand the hightlinks and blur them", right? ,16:58,February 6,2012 (UTC)

His hind leg doesn't look completely shaded, the one on <-- that side. :3 22:16, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Leafstorm, I did expand the highlights and blur them. I always do everything the people tell me to =3 And I just realized the shading needs to be blurred... <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺<font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="4" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~<font color="orange" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">L <font color="yellow" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="green" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="blue" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">f <font color="purple" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">y <font color="pink" face="Segoe Script" size="4"  style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">~  <font color="red" face="Segoe Script" size="6" style="background:none; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">☺ 02:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think that shading is too heavy.

Cheshire, you should be specific. Where is the shading too heavy? Honestly, I think the highlights could be blurred a little more, and blended with the shading more. Right now, you can clearly tell where the shading/highlights meet. When I use them (rare, but I still use 'em now =P), I try and make them flow together. 17:43, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *headdesk* I made this such a fail >.< 14:43, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

He's kinda starting to look an off-white ish color. Why don't you ask Mistypebble, the artist of Egg's apprentice image, for the pelt color? She probably still has the original file. 04:52, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Leafy, are you still working on this? 23:00, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the hauche shading. <span style="">01:23, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

D= Yes, I'm still working. I couldn't get on yesterday, sorry =( 11:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's about time <3 12:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around his ears and head, and lighten and blur the shading. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 16:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't believe no one noticed he needed a torn ear... 16:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more thick and blur the shadings more. 18:47, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) ~ For Approval
The ear needed to be torn since he was a loner when he was decribed with it. Comments? 01:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripe a small bit? 01:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, as well. 04:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You're not allowed to have to chararts up at once anymore. You're gonna have to withdraw one of them. If you keep this one, darken the shading. 07:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Please pick one or I will choose one at random to decline. Right now, you're pretty much ensuring that you can do both of your images. Just a heads up, alright? 18:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I want this one withdrawing the other 01:12, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink a bit. 17:24, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripe a bit more..01:31, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:04, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more, and maybe add a lighter part to the bottom of the stomach. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah 22:53, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:51, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights and shading (and if you don't use highlights, then where the shading isn't) 05:02, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 04:50, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry to interrupt CBA :( but could you blur the belly/side shading a bit more? 01:04, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:57, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add a "highlight" on the stomach area? He looks thinner than thin without it :P <span style="">02:39 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded 13:15, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  13:23, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Q) ~ CBA
Like a middle manager! >8D But really, convo for this is on the talk page. I edited the lineart to make her not-pregnant looking... so essentially, behold my image of Squirrelflight laying down! Comments? 00:27, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is..so purdy 8DDD Can you add some more stripes to the flank pretty please? 00:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

<333 Can you blur the flank stripes a tad also? 00:31, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! ^^ Can you blur all the stripes a bit actually? And as for the lineart, it seems a bit like her chest is sticking out a bit too much at the bottom. Like there's flab or something. Could you get rid of the little bit? :) 00:35, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I trimmed her down a bit more. Her back wouldn't be arching so much when she isn't pregnant or nursing. And I would add more stripes, but that'd deviate from her already established design. 02:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but can you move her pupil more to the centre? She looks like she's freaked out about something beside her xD Other than that, beautiful. 02:41, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'd actually rather leave them as is. I kinda wanted to make her look guilty, and I guess freaked out works as well. 03:38, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Well all righty then c: Tear her ear. 03:39, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:15, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out that lump in the middle of her back and raise her hindquarters. Breeze whisker  05:29, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you redline the hindquarters thing? I'm not sure what you mean. 05:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

That was badly phrased. Sorry. But I kinda meant to like make the hindquarters more rounded. I'd think with the lack of the belly, her weight would shift to lie less on her stomach and more on her haunches. Can you kinda see what I mean with this guy? I certainly don't envy you with this tweak. XD The anatomy changes a lot in a pregnant cat.. Breeze whisker  06:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Ahh, yup, I got it. Thanks. 06:06, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that?

The hind foot looks a little weird in that position. Move the hind foot a little over <--- side, even if it's only a little bit. 18:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the haunch lineart is kind of thick at the bottom. Thin it out to two pixils wide. Looking pretty good thar Ms. Shelly! 19:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Taper the tail up by the base. Maybe also make the hip a bit pointier towards the top; a bit too round with the more slender back. 02:22, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart at the bottom of the chin looks a bit thick. Thin it out by a pixel or two. 17:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Did all that, and brought the tail in so it's a bit more consistent with the other queen images. 04:06, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The chin's still a bit thick and there's a kinda random bump on the haunch. Smooth that out a bit. 04:53, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I put the bump there in response to Scarlet's comment. 05:03, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 07:11, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:39, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the bump on the haunch a bit flatter? Don't remove it, but just make it less protruding. Make the chest curve in a bit more and add some shaggy hair to it. <span style="">23:58 Mon Feb 6

Re-Uploaded. I'm not re-adding the bit of shaggy fur going inder the front leg, since it's representational of a fat fold pregnant cats get. 23:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The neck seems a bit fat, could you thin it a bit? 16:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Ffff, I just curved it out because Wildheart asked me to. =_= Fine, I'll this it out... again... 20:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I trimmed out the neck and fluffed up the tail. Please don't ask me to trim out the chest as well. She does have a ribcage, you know. 17:45, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but the neck still curves out like this; (. It should curve in like this; ). And the chest should be trimmed out. She may have a chest, but in cats, it's much farther back and doesn't stick out like that. 03:06, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Sorry, but have you looked at a cat lately? Cats, especially wild ones, have a lot of loose skin even when they're thin. I'd rather leave her as is. I think she looks fine, especially considering the fact that the queens are always fed more than the rest of the Clan. 14:57, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelqueen looks fine to me. CBA? 22:38, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry to disagree, but if she's not pregnant, she wouldn't have that much fat around her neck and chest. And if you look at a cat's anatomy, the ribs are way back compared to this. And the neck shouldn't curve out like that. And using the excuse that she would have fat cause she's fed more, we should just use the normal blank, as she would be fat, and that's not what we're doing. So please fix it? 07:58, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

No, Paleh. If I thinned out her neck to curve in she'd look like a foreign cat, and she is decidedly not one. She's a moggie, and all but foreign cats have very little neck in the first place and they tend to look a little round when they're laying down. She looks perfectly natural. If you don't believe me, just look at this recumbant non-pregnant cat here. Cats have a lot of loose skin, and when they lay down this is how they look. Now, I'm continuing my CBA. 14:38, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Fine, don't thin out the curve, but at least smooth it, it's bumpy and uneven, like her chest is sticking out from more than just flab. And smooth the haunch juuust a tad. And also blur the stripes a bit. 15:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

If I smooth it out it'll be even fatter looking. I've smoothed the haunch as much as I can without it being back to the was it was before I was told previously to make it stick out more, and the stripes match her other images, so they're staying. 15:20, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

No it won't. It's plenty possible to smooth it out and keep it thin looking. If anything, in my opinion, it looks fatter this way. And the stripes do not match, they're more blurred on her warrior image. 15:36, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fine. I smoothed out the neck and blurred the stripes even more (though they matched the apprentice and kit chararts fine). But I'm not touching that leg, I like how it looks, and it's my right to say no to a critique like that. 21:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ummm...can I comment on the lineart? If so, where the back meets the haunch is really sharp and unatural. Also blur the stripes a bit more, maybe darken the shaging. Lovely as always. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave! 01:14, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

That's her knee joint, it's perfectly natural. The stripes are blurred as much as I will go while still matching the other chararts, and the shading it at the exact same level as the apprentice charart. 14:39, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

doesn't look very natural to me... The stripes don't match the other images, they should be blurred more, I agree with Sand, and just cause the shading opacity works on one image, doesn't mean it works on a completely different blank. And just pointing this out, at this point, you're basically saying you refuse to change anything. Everything that needs to be changed you won't do. 20:55, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for butting in, Paleh, but technically, Shelly doesn't have to /do/ anything. It's stated in the guidelines that an artist doesn't always have to do what's asked of them. If they don't want to go with a suggestion, they don't have to. *is shot* 20:58, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

I know. And that's fine, I'm just pointing out that she's choosing not to change pretty much anything on this image, and that just didn't seem completely right in my opinion... *shrugs* You're right though, it is her choice. 04:24, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

I've changed it plenty. But thanks. I merely refuse to take out her hip joint or blur her stripes into non-existence. I've been CBA'd twice and you've revoked it twice based on things that I'd established that I was not going to change because I don't feel I should for both the sake of realism and consistency. I'm not the one being stubborn here, you are. 14:01, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Woah there Shelly, not trying to start anything here. Just pointing out that you were refusing to change everything that needed to be fixed, despite mote than one person asking you to. And it was more than just those two things. But if the other SMs agree, then fine, go ahead an start the CBA again. I just thought those things should be fixed, because, whether you believe they should be changed or not, I fully do, but as Cloudy pointed out, I guess it is your choice, so whatever. I just wanted her image to be the best it could. 18:21, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, let's try and not kill each other, please. I'm just going to CBA this, since Shelly's already established her stance on the matter, and in the end, it always has been and always will be artist's choice. CBA? 19:13, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Look, I'm sorry, I just don't like it when people try to force me to make changes I don't want to make. But I re-uploaded, anyway. 00:57, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Pod (Lo) ~ CBA
Woot! I snagged another one! Comments? 14:16, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. 14:21, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. =3 15:51, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the muzzle a little. 16:09, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes are showing now. 17:32, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 18:39, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bettah? 18:49, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Well done, blur the muzzle a tad more, and the ear-pink and define the shading a tad. 02:32, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing. 03:20, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 04:45, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some scars around his muzzle, since he was described with a scarred muzzle. 04:47, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good to me, but yeah you should add the scars -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  04:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

'''TIGERHEART! '''Dont mentoin the same things, please learn to read, yes? ,11:58,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. (optional I think ;3 )

Re-uploaded. I know I fixed the earpink! D= Added scars~ 23:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little. 03:15, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? :3 11:52, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the shading (make sure it's all the same darkness) 05:04, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...on another charart for approval, I heard from Moonleaf that shading doesn't necessarily have to be the same darkness. But I'll do my best. x3 14:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred the shading a bit, but I'm not making it the same darkness. 22:59, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and it should be ready. Lovely, Mooneh! 21:27, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 21:58, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think you could blur the grey muzzle more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 11:03, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the scars just a tad? :3 20:04, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars a little. 21:57, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

If I blur the scars, they'll touch each other and it'll look like he's blushing x3. 10:51, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the long wait. Don't look at my shame~! *hangs head* 11:20, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful, Mooneh. CBA? 16:46, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Socks (Lo) - For Approval
Ew, he's so ugly now that I made him D: Comments? <span style="">22:48 Sat Feb 4

Darken the base color. He looks gray. 22:52, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Was off his old loner image but ok. *Shrugs* <span style="">23:35 Sat Feb 4

It looks great :), nice job... I might blur the earpink just a little more Tiger  heart  ♥  23:42, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Reminds ne of my cat. 8D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  02:21, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, next time, please do not just post compliments, post something constructive as well, unless there's been no other comments for 24 hours. Smudge the earpink a little bit more. 04:41, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ok Sweet, i know its only small thing but the white parts looks gray to me, can you lighten them a little please? 11:55, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think they're white, but if someone else agrees, I will change it. <span style="">18:24 Sun Feb 5

Let me give you a suggestion. Here's what I do. I shade the black part and the white on separate layers. That way I can play around with the opacity and everything, and so the black looks black, and the white looks...well...white.

Define the neck shading. 06:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:32 Wed Feb 8

Smudge the muzzle into the pelt. 21:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:49 Wed Feb 8

Can you blur the belly shading? 21:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. (IMO) <span style="">22:00 Wed Feb 8

Blur it a bit, Sweet. ^^ 02:19, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job~! ^^ Blur the ear pink a bit and smudge the back paw. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:07, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">01:57 Fri Feb 10

Blur the earpink a bit more. 21:31, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:49 Fri Feb 10

Define the "highlights" 05:05, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">22:01 Sun Feb 12

He looks just a tad bit more gray than black. Darken the base color? 20:08, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I would, but if I do than I have to darken the shading and than you won't see the lineart. <span style="">21:21 Tue Feb 14

Blur where the pelt meets the earpink a little. 21:56, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the highlights. 23:40, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I don't use highlights, and I think it's fine. But I forgot to say Re-uploaded yesterday after Rowan's comment. <span style="">23:50 Fri Feb 17

Ruby (Lo) - Under Evaluation
Alright, there she is...anyone like? comments please! Thanks

Tiger heart  ♥  01:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading, make sure the ear-pink fill the ear capacity, and erase the pink that's spilling from the lineart 01:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less hotpink, make it the same as her kit charart. <span style="">01:44 Sun Feb 5

Sure I'll reupload it in a second Tiger heart  ♥  01:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Tiger heart  ♥  01:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is still not 50% complete. Suggesting for deletion again. Get this to at least 50% completiong before uploading this again. 02:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, I suggest you look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement and blurring  02:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Thank you -- Tiger heart  ♥  02:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and I looked at the tutorials (thanks, Ivy) Tiger  heart  ♥  02:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading and fix the pixels on the paws, fill 'em in. 03:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay; Re-uploaded --☯ Tiger heart  ♥  03:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)


 * 1) It looks like some of the lineart on the legs and belly are blurred, possibly erase the extra pixels around it.
 * 2) Make the earpink the same colour and smudge it.
 * 3) Fill in the grey pixels on her feet and tail.
 * 4) Blur the shading LOTS . 05:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Er. Instead of the file archive, could you post the actual image? 05:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Redone -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't upload a new file each time you change it. Re-upload it over File:Ruby.loner.png. 05:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay -- Tigerheart  stay golden...  ❦  05:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to blur the shading tons. Try using guassion blur under filters. There are also white pixels on the front paw closest to us. <span style="">08:26, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

You also still need to post the actual image, no the archive of it. And I don't think this is 80% complete, so you have a week to improve it before it's declined I believe. 08:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There are light pixels on the front paw, shadings are only applied not blurred, blurred lineart, some colours (ear-pink) are on the places where they can't be- this is all things they are wrong.. fix that 11:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sp... I can't upload the new one I did for a week? :( I fixed the pixels on the paw... hm... Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:26, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You can upload it. What Paleh means is, the charart/image doesn't look 80% complete. You have a week to make it look 80% complete. Constructivly, post the file, not the archive. 23:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  23:37, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So if I upload it again, will it get declined? If it's not perfect (by people's standards) Tigerheart   scratch...  ❦  02:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind. Misunderstood it. Re-uploaded -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

... =_= Use the female lineart, not the male. 02:58, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons still. i can help you if you wish. Also smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">06:14, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Redone... still need to do something about the shading, I believe, but I fixed the pixels, used the female blank, and blended the earpink -- Tigerheart  scratch...  ❦  02:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --❦ Woo  patch of green  273  04:14, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to be lightened up a lot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Sky Fus Roh Dah  08:48, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Redone once again, and lightened *wink wink* ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  22:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. If I could, I'd change the heading to "For Approval", because it looks way better than it did the first time. 00:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart I reserved this a week ago-- 00:46, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Acorn, you already have Birdpaw up, and you can have one up for approval at a time. 00:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blurring the earpink... Thanks Moon! Thanks! ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  01:45, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks some of her tail got cut off, but it might just be me. :3 18:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, Tigerheart, I mentioned if I could change the heading, and it doesn't mean you can change the heading. Only a senior warrior and above can do that if they feel the image is at least 80% complete. 20:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry... *embarrassed* I'm really sorry. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:13, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading on the body. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 23:12, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded... You can barely see the changes I made but they're there... lawl. Woo patch of green  ❦  03:14, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please stop thumbing your image. All you need to say is "re-uploaded" when you upload the file. xD 03:16, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

okay sorry. It won't happen again... is this 80% by any Senior Warrior's standards? I would like to do another and I have the day off from school today, so I have a lot of time to do a charart. How long do I have to wait until someone can approve this? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Has there been any comments besides mine in the past 12 hours? Woo patch of green  ❦  17:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Be patient. There's blurred lineart on her back leg. 21:53, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll fix that Woo  patch of green  ❦  22:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  00:12, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stop changing the file to a url. And she's light grey, not dark. Just follow the apprentice tutorials and try to match the other images as closely as possible. 00:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  00:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the face and blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  08:30, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the kit image. The kittypet is too dark and should be tweaked. 15:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded and lightened the shading... a lot. ♥ V-day  I want sugar ♥    22:39, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Woo, stop thumbing it. Just leave the file code alone, it'll update on its own. 22:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I will. Can I ask a question? What does Under Evaluation mean? Woo patch of green  ❦  02:40, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, it means that the image you put up is under evaluation by the project. If you post an image that is over 80% (I think) finished then you get to put the heading "For Approval" and you get promoted to an apprentice!! I hope I helped...and blur the "highlights." 21:45, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for telling me, and am an apprentice. Woo patch of green  ❦  22:17, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 04:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  04:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Un-thumbed. Define the shading on the face and blur the earpink. 05:08, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the body shading. c: <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  06:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo  patch of green  ❦  15:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the lineart near the earpink, also define the belly shading. 23:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Lighten and blur the head shading. 14:11, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart in the ear, waste under the tail, and a misplaced black pixle on her leg (I think). Also, please define the haunch and shoulder shading and lighten the shading on the face a bunch. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 17:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) ~ For Approval
I like this one. Comments? 20:03, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the earpink. :3 22:38, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

He looks way too dark. I also used the burn tool several times, so please make the spots differing colors and not just one color. 23:10, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink has to be a little more visible ❦ Woo  patch of green  273  04:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart, please stop repeating comments. 12:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Redone. Better? 02:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Lighten her more. Maybe don't have the flecks on the highest opacity. 02:36, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste right above the nose. 06:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add some speckles under the lineart instead of stopping before it along the spine please. Also I think there's a speck of waste on the front leg farthest from us. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 01:22, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Shadeh, are you still working on this? 20:18, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. I've been busy. It'll be reuploaded soon. 21:29, February 13, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  00:05, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it's been a week. I'm taking over. 03:37, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Alright. That's fine. I'm really sorry about all this guys. 00:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Soot (Lo) ~ For Approval
Well...here she is...Soot! <3 Any comments? 10:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Define the earpink.

Woo patch of green  ❦  13:59, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken all of the shading. 15:33, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing. 23:50, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 11:48, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink just a little more, to match her kit charart Woo  patch of green  ❦  20:36, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whol eimage just a tad. 21:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry for the delay ^^; 08:34, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit and blur the shading a bit. 21:54, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 10:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gah, found some evil waste and killed it, reuploaded. 10:33, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the whole image a bit. I can barely see the lineart. 22:35, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on the left side of the lifted leg. 14:43, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :P There's no waste around the lifted leg, there was around the far right leg. 08:34, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a tad? I can't tell the difference between the lineart and the shading. 22:10, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt A) - For Approval
Here she is....I realize that the shading could be blurred more, and that I may have gotten the image name wrong, but I will fix that in a moment. Comments? 21:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The filename should be Ivypool.apprentice.alt.png. Just re-upload over this, and you'll be fine. Also, blur the shading. 21:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Thanks Cloudskye, for clarifying the file name. 21:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needsto be blended into the pelt a bit more. 23:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and define the nose pink. <span style="">23:53 Wed Feb 8

Define the tail shading. 00:03, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, but still have that "smudged earpink" look. <span style="">06:30, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Lighten the eyes up. They looks rather dark. 22:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes should be fine if you just reverse the depth. It looks better if you have the dark bit closer to the white shiny and the lighter bit at the bottom. <span style="">07:08 Fri Feb 10

The eyes should also be green, as she was mistakenly described with them. 11:48, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste under her chest and a speck of waste along the bottom of the image. <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 12:35, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Turns out, I forgot to add the nose pink, and go over detail. I fail. I feel overjoyed. 21:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

If it's a gray cat, then she has a gray nose. Thicken and blur the shading a ton 05:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on this -> ear 21:55, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate the blur tool 02:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Tried the gaussian blur tool, yet? If not, then try it, 'cause I think the shading needs to be blurred more. :P 02:14, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I use gaussian for all my shading. Unfortunately, I'm having so much trouble with the shading. I use Pixlr, so I'm not really sure how to fix it. I 'll play around with it though. 07:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tell me if the back needs more blurring. If I'm right, then I live in a pineapple. 08:10, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch shading could use blurring 08:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 08:57, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail and haunch shading more. 22:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste along the tail. 02:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. -- Elork   04:15, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Here's what I did: I redid the image. I like how it looks now. 19:56, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear a bit, and add definition to the eyes. <span style="">02:34 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded. 08:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire  13:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:04, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth in the eye and blur the shading...? 23:53, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. <span style="">01:30, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Speckle (Lo) ~ CBA
Meh... *shrug* Comments? 22:27, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the flecks. :P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To kill an Empire... 22:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and blurred the flecks just a tad. 23:07, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading on the midriff and darken it. 23:48, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. 00:06, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened/blurred the shading on the midriff and brightened the earpink. 01:24, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Do the specks have shading? Cause they kinda get lost in the shaded parts. And make them not all the same size if you can. good job. ^^ 11:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly add some more flecks. 22:33, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oy.. I did not like how this turned out. >.< Defined the specks and added more. >.> 00:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Pshaw, this looks great! Darken the shading a tad. 05:20, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flecks some more (if you can without making it a mess) ♫Purplemoon♪   Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  00:01, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry that I didn't get to post this sooner, I got sick. x.x Darkened the shading, and in my opinion, the flecks are fine but if anyone else agrees, I'll blur them. 19:17, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur them a tad. 21:51, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

No, the flecks look fine. They match the queen. 14:31, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

If you look closely on the queen, she doesn't have any flecks on her paws, belly, or the tip of her tail, so could you remove those? 16:00, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got rid of some of the flecks. 22:23, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Make the flecks more oval-shaped and rounded like the queen image. 08:36, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it looks to match pretty well to me. The queen image is stretched out, so the speckles would be slightly distorted. CBA? 17:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ki) - For Approval


Dies of friggin' cuteness* Okay, See in the T&S manga, Into The Woods, Page 55 she is seen as a kit. And Paleclaw, Ivystripe, and Skye all agree that she should get a kit image. Comments? Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 05:15, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes, define the ear-pink, blur the muzzle and give some depth in the shading 05:19, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading <3 05:21, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 05:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh chest highlight/shading. You were right, she /is/ cute~ 18:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think the brown muzzle should go down so far. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 18:26, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:20, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still, Blur the shading some more. 07:42, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the highlights some if you use the, make the dark muzzle more round, blur all the darker brown except the stripes, and make the eyes a much brighter blue to match the other images. 16:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please?  23:59, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 23:31, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more, and blur the shading, expecially on the cats waists, both sides, and the cats right front leg. <span style="">06:23, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

Can you make the earpink more triangular? And is the nose brown or pink? 22:07, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Moss (Lo) - For Approval
Comments? 17:07, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely 'Teldy! Tone down the highlights, and lighten the shading on all legs. 17:10, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 21:20, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty~ :3 Blur the ear pink <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 22:28, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the tail shading. 17:38, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the legs a bit ^^ Good Job 'Teldy. 21:28, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. 04:49, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:14, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading some more, and also smudge the earpink more. Lovely Teldz. <span style="">06:25, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

'Reuploaded. 03:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Since there is a distinct light source from above, shouldn't there be a highlight/no shading on the back on the neck and the base of the tail? I might be wrong... It might just be the way my phone is showing it o3o  <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 03:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and/or lighten the base colour; I can barely see the lineart near the legs. 03:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The light source is not directly overhead otherwise you'd get something where the whole back of the cat is highlighted. My light source is somewhat coming from a 45-90 degree angle away from the spot directly overhead....if that made any sense at all. 03:45, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

It made enough sense that I understood :P Never mind then~ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 20:29, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (Lo) ~ CBA
I don't have much to say about this image. Comments? 04:57, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing just a tad; I can't see the shoulder lineart very clearly. Very nice. ♥ V-day I want sugar ♥  07:09, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a tad more? 21:49, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Shaindg's fine, unless you mean the whole image. 02:24, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

*derp* Yes, I did mean the whole image. xP 22:33, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneh, I reserved this on the 10th 20:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Yeah, but Moonshine, you didn't put it in the proper column, so Stoneclaw had NO idea you had it reserved. No offense, but it's your careless mistake. 22:29, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Moonshine, sorry but I always look at the right column. You made the mistake, and I don't look at the wrong columns, so if you make a mistake, I can't do anything about that. 02:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail and right front paw shading. Just seems a little dark is all. Otherwise, this is amazing. As always, cousin o' mine. 3:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little redder. <3 05:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? 05:36, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? 17:36, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Jet (Lo) - For Approval
Meh...I really have no comments on this one. Any from you guys? :3 You may have to check the file history. 21:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'Highlights' 22:14, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a bit. 22:32, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'd rather not change the earpink - I got it and all the other colors off the other image. Yes, this is Twi. :P  03:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base color? It's hard to see the lineart. Also there's a bit of waste under his chin~(that or my phone's being weird again) <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 23:50, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the color is fine. I can see the lineart, and he's a black cat, not a dark gray cat. Just clean up whatever waste there is and I'll CBA. 17:37, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...I opened it on Photoshop and saw no waste...even after I gave it a red background to see.... 18:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Lo) ~ CBA
I adore black cats for some reason. Comments? Yes, the (Lo) is there twice for a reason. 04:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

lol Tone down the earpink a little. 04:46, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? I just chose a random red the first time, since I didn't have the color handy. 04:52, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and make it a tad more red. Elork  13:57, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

I color picked from the queen image. I'm not changing it anymore. Re-uploaded. 07:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and add/define depth to the eye? 22:30, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:36, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful. CBA? 05:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for interupting, but can you lighten the legs a bit? 18:00, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded......you're evil, Silver. XD 18:06, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 19:46, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Shadepelt (Lo) - For Approval
Comments? 18:17, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh! I forgot that Ice was still under CBA, even though it should have been approved by now. So, will this have to be declined, or Ice would be approved, therefore I can keep this? 18:28, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

I'll go approve it, but make sure to check next time. 18:36, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading :3 21:32, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate th eearpink a bit. It looks sorta gray. 22:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

I think the earpink's fine - at least, it looks like the other images. 02:33, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:31, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:26, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat a little. 05:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (lo) - For Approval
Bah, I dont think I matched it well. =.= 03:20, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh stripes moar :3 03:22, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice <span style="">06:32, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

Bloo.....you never added a date to the table.... I just saved your rear end there. I added the date you reserved the image. =P 22:39, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the haunch shading a tad. 23:31, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little. This is lovely~ ^^ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!   <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 20:33, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo) ~ For Approval
I tried my best... First cat I uploaded myself. :3 Comments, please and thank you? 17:35, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad. This is wonderful, Thistle! =3 19:19, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! :'D 0:15, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Lovely! 05:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Red" >Sky To Kill An Empire 06:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks so much, guys. :3 Defined tail shading and earpink. 16:01, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink into the ear, and define the shading on (her) right legs~ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 23:47, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 2:13, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading a tad. Nice ^^ 18:50, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (Lo) -- For Approval
Okay, so my skills are a little rusty, but this is my first charart in over a year. Comments? •Maple fern•  22:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, blur the highlights, darken the shading, good job. 23:35, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ugh, GIMP crashed and I had to redo it. DX •Maple  fern•  01:20, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlights a bit. Also smudge the earpink. nice. <span style="">01:43, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Reuploaded. •Maple  fern•  02:26, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (Lo) - For Approval
Comments? 23:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading <3 23:37, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

And there's a bit of black sticking out from his eye that makes him look like a girl. 00:56, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

You stole my next charart. Meanie. *curses Scarlet* Blur the highlights. 03:35, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (Alt. MC) ~ For Approval
Finally I got a ginger kitty 8D Mothwing!! Most epic character ever <333 Anyway, there was a discussion about this. On the picture it looked like she had white paws but I can remove them if someone thinks they shouldn't be there. The white parts on her face should be there though. So ya, comments? 05:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. I hate you for this. Dx <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Violet" >Sky Super pervetedness! 06:50, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Oh hush Sky XD 06:55, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and there's a bit of waste on her right ear. This is so purdy~ <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 12:25, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Aww, are you joking? THIS IS SO CUTE, define the ear-pink please ,13:16,February 18,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much :DD 15:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make her just a tiny bit more orange, as she is in her image, and darken the stripes to match as well? 16:09, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  16:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the haunch shading, and define the earpink. I <3 this. 8D 19:34, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploade Gaaww Thank you Stoney <3333 19:39, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Alt.A) - For Approval
It was withdrawn before and no one taken it, well, i have right to do him?! I made him longhaired to match his pelt lenght now, but i can change it. Well? ,19:15,February 18,2012 (UTC)

Lighten him up a tad. 19:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes. 19:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. Lovely. =3 19:33, February 18, 2012 (UTC)