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Thistleclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
I totally ruined it. >< OA is Nightshine, Redone artist is Ivystripe and tweakers are Ashshadow and me. Tweaked tom match description. Many credit and thanks to Burntclaw for sending in the apprentice file, and that made my life much easier. :) 08:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white 08:56, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

K so I smudged my white patches with a 10 px bristle brush and i did not smudge or blur the texture- i used a paint brush and added dark and light tones to show the light hitting the fur and the shadows to give his fur a "bristling" effect. Nice image, anyway =) 09:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the texture on the white please. 09:12, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

why does he have white paws? hes only speicifed white and grey on his face and shoulders. 11:03, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

nvm, cite got found 12:06, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

He looks like hes still mottled, is that intentional? 22:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

That's texture. There is tabby stripes I promise, it's just harder to see because it's a tiny image. 23:01, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more please, with a hard edged one px brush 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload If I have to turn the internet upside down to get a better smudge tool >< 07:21, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I'm going to be that person but I still seriously think you should smudge the white more ;; 13:13, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on his face isn't texture; it's little triangles that just throw the colour off...also, could you add a bit of depth to the shading? It's looking a bit flat. 13:15 Sat Oct 3

Reupload I'm being careful with the shading as the texture and stripes disappear when it gets too dark, and I'm near the brink. Everyone's fluffing up their Thistleclaw a lot! Do I need to fluff Thistlekit? 20:18, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

His other images appear to have a small bit of black near the eyes- do you mind adding that? The warrior and dark forest images show what I'm insinuating. 21:27, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't tell me to smudge it anymore, cause I did before and it somehow disappeared O.o. 21:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

White looks gray on the paws 23:57, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:03, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

I still think it looks gray to me, tbh. Try erasing some shading on them 01:01, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload White against dark is a pain >< 05:42, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

i don't know why but the texture makes him look mottled... 07:29, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the two front paws. 20:36, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I've lowered the opacity of the texture to help see the stripes and smudged them. I completely forgot about the paws so I'll do that in the next upload. 21:01, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make him look more spiky, like on the apprentice and warrior? 01:05, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload spike! spiiiiiiiiike! That's a fun word. 07:30, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

fluff up his left side of the cheek, it looks oddly unbalanced. 11:40, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Uh tomorrow is when it's a week since I posted. If this doesn't pass by tomorrow, (which seems unlikely), will this be declined? 05:12, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

A redone image is 2 weeks. Could you fluff out the right side of the face more? (On the face) 05:42, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:57, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

The texture just looks like random scribbles, and it doesn't match the flow of the fur. Fix it, please. 14:44 Fri Oct 9

Reupload 00:05, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Make the tail more spiky. 02:20, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:48, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the face could be more spiky, cause it kinda looks... awkward? for a lack of a better word 23:15, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the legs more spiky, like all of his other parts? Nice work :) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:51, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

If theyre not spiky on his other images then it shluld stay 20:15, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you actually define the shading a tad? 22:48, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 06:28, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

The texture is making him look mottled... or is that just me? 11:37, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

Looks texture-like to me, but then I look at it zoomed in a lot. Second opinion? 19:51, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

I believe he looks mottled as well. 20:32, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Well, any suggestions on fixing it? 21:15, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (W) ~ Tweaked
Second try.

Blur the shading some more and define it on the most unvisible paw. 18:10, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups

Blur the shading more, please.

re-ups Believe me or not, it's actually getting over-blurred. I toned the shading down a bit and hopt that helps.

It is not over-blurred. Blur the haunch more please. 12:36 Mon Oct 12

re-ups I tried, okay? ;-; I cannot blur it anymore...

try enlightening the shading and have a mix of smudging and bluring shading. It might help. 15:01, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the neck shading? 05:24, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail? 22:46, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) - Tweaked
lightened. oa was insane and duck, and i tweaked it. 04:53, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the paw light? 15:45, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 16:13, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten her some more. It's literally nearly white, a bit above silver. I compared the apprentice and the elder, and mine was a good amount lighter 02:17, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Snow, this is the same color code that Cloudy gave me... 02:21, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe it's my computer again, but mine seems alot lighter for some reason... Shouldn't you match mine anyway? Mine was approved first, unless I'm completely missing Skye's charart 02:26, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Icy already said it's the same colour and shade. They look matched to me, so it must be your monitor. 02:28, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

It probably is, because I'm using a crappy tv as my monitor lol (a small one). Anywho, can you brighten the earpink just a tiny bit? 02:41, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 02:46, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you possibly smooth out the shading a bit more? 12:37, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 23:32, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is creeping away from the lineart on the back and next and back of the head. Fix that? 12:37 Mon Oct 12

What do you mean? 13:14, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

She means the shading is leaking on the back and the neck 13:19, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I don't know if I fixed it... 13:38, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

It still appears as if theres still some shading leaking on the back along the tufts of fur that are sticking up as well as behind the ear closest to us 20:12, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

You sure? It doesn't show that on my screen - and GIMP doesn't show it. 22:39, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah I used my phone to double check. It's really hard to see, but I see it 22:41, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see any leaking shading, on my phone or my computer.

I see it well on mac, laptop, and phone... Its leaking all around the back and tail. 03:05, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, I can't see it. Can someone do an outline, and maybe I can try to fix it? 14:28, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I don't know. I looked at it and the redline someone gave me but... 23:49, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

Birchfall (K) ~ Tweaked
OA is Skt, Mistypebble, and Shaf Girl. Tweaked due to flat shading. 20:58, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the neck shading? 05:23, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  05:55, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see the stripes through the main body shading. 23:08, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) - Redone
much better :-) OAs are insane and me. redone for issues. 01:41 Tue Oct 13

I know you've noticed, but waste. :) 01:43, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading plz 01:56, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. i realized that this pattern is like a grown up version of my old pattern :') 22:14 Tue Oct 13

I don't know if you noticed or not (it might only be me) but it looks like on the very base, back of the tail, it looks like the color is receding away from the lineart? 22:43, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

that's intentional, actually! i gave him a paler underside and the I included base of the tail in the pale parts. i can remove it if it looks too strange? 23:03 Tue Oct 13

Maybe you could darken it a tad to match the other pale parts? 23:31, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Not sure if my eyes are being dumb but is there blue waste on his muzzle? 07:25, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

I see the waste. 11:31, October 14, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded I just removed the pale part under the tail. 22:40 Thu Oct 15

Graystripe (D) - Tweaked
Darkened. OAs consist of Evanpath, me, and I think Loonie and DJ tweaked it. 01:10, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

You seemed to have darkened the eye white. 01:54, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Oops. 01:58, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Icy did you mean to call him Gaystripe lmao xD Anyway, can you define the shading a tad? It seems to be a bit flat 02:08, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: No, I did not mean to call him Gaystripe. :P Also, shh. I see the waste. I will get rid of it. 02:34, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Graystripe (W) - Tweaked
Tweaked for darkening. I also added in a layer of shading depth, as it appeared a tad flat. OA's were Sandstar12, Elmfur, LeafstrikeAsakura, Stoneclaw33, and Rainlegs. 02:23, October 15, 2015 (UTC)

Graystripe (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Hawkmask, tweaked to darken. 14:48, October 15, 2015 (UTC)