Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 29

Rosepetal (W) - For Approval
Not much to say about this one... Constructments? --Hawktalon Talk 23:09, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful job Hawktalon!!! Could you just blur the tail a little? ★ Hi dd en sun Talk 23:21, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, blur the tail shadows. Might want to blur the highlights too, but you don't have to. --Mousetalon 23:33, November 28, 2009 (UTC) I'm re-doin my siggy.

Reuploaded - Fixed. And, once again, the changes wouldn't show, so I had to rename the image. Jeez, this has happened twice with me today... --Hawktalon Talk 23:45, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

It's happening to me a lot of times too. ★ Hi dd en sun Talk 23:49, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Same here. :) Mousetalon Call Me Mouse!!!

It's happening to everybody, so I asked Bramble about it, and she said it was okay to upload the new files if we had to. Image-wise, darken the ear pink some, it's hard to see since the fur is a red-ish color. But otherwise, great job! I really like this image! --  Icy -chan  00:25, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Icethroat! I fixed the ear pink. Hopefully, the upload log will be fixed by tomorrow. --Hawktalon Talk 01:19, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Um... she doesn't look like her kit version (who has faint tabby stripes). Cream is a diluted ginger, and thus has stripes.-- Darkhallows 04:07, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Shady is right. Also, the shading looks too dark to me. Sandy  Talk   15:59, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *slaps self in face* Stupid me, how could I have forgotten the tabby stripes? Well, I added some faint stripes and lightened the shading. (*sigh* There goes my hopes of the upload log working today. Bramble, could you delete the extra files of Rosepetal, please? Thanks.) --Hawktalon Talk 17:51, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the back is very dark; lighten it a bit. Otherwise, awesome job. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦Contribs 13:36, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened back shading. And, omg the upload log works now:D --Hawktalon Talk 20:07, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes look more like lightened areas in the shading rather than tabby stripes, and on the hind leg, for example, you can barely see the tabby stripes. Make them darker than the fur, like the kit image. Otherwise, it looks good. --  Icy -chan  02:04, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Urm, the stripes are darker than the fur. I think I can understand how someone can mistake the regular fur color in some places to be the stripes. --Silverbells Merry Xmas! 16:15, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...can you maybe make them a little darker by running the burn tool over them a couple of times? (not sure if this will help it or not) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. Anything else? --Silverbells Merry Xmas! 01:26, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Wow. *hits self on head repeatedly with a random heavy book* I see the stripes now, I thought they were a part of the shading, and that the stripes were the fur. (Basically, as you said.) Yep, it looks a lot better now. Comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:13, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Great job- It looks much better now.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Bone- For Approval
Hey, he's back! Since he's no longer reserved, I decided to bring him back. Constructments? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 02:10, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink, and make the color of the scar sort of a reddish color. Otherwise, great job! I'm glad to see him back up for approval, the image was too good to waste. --  Icy -chan  12:02, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading (especially on the white parts), as well as what Icethroat said, and he'll be ready. :) Nice job. -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦Contribs 13:28, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Add a Bloodclan collar.--Minnowclaw 00:32, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, guys! How's this? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 02:32, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Love it, I really don't see anything else at the moment. Does anyone else??? --Honeyrose34 01:18, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Don't know if I'm being picky or anything, but does he need a mouth? It's really good, though! :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined

No, he doesn't need a mouth. It's like it should be on the blank. Make the ear pink a little bit thicker, and then he should be ready. --  Icy -chan  01:55, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 03:06, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Great; comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:18, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Rowanstar - For Approval


Most of the credit goes to my former apprentice, Swallowtip. I just fixed a few things and put it back. Constructments? -- Tinsel claw  22:48, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I thought I recognized this. I had to do a double take to make sure he hadn't come back. This is great Bramble. I love it.--Minnowclaw 00:21, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I can't find anything wrong, and no one seems to have any comments, so, comments before approval? (I'm really glad to see Swallowtip's image not go to waste.) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:06, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Larksong - For Approval
Larksong was so nice to the kits in Bluestar's Prophecy that I just had to do her. :D Comments? -- ♫ Ec h om i st Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 00:15, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, Wait, Wait, Echo, your signing date says the 2nd of December but it's only the 1st! Even your 2nd image below too! Did you do that or is that your computer?? --Honeyrose34 01:27, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

It's just my insane computer, don't worry about it. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 01:45, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is universal time. The new day starts at a specific time. For those who live in America, it's either 5:00, 6:00, or 7:00 when the new day starts, according to the different time zones. Aaaanyway, beautiful image, Echo. The only thing I see (being picky), is that the muzzle looks empty. Maybe put a few patches in? -- Tinsel claw  01:58, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Thanks, Bramble (or should I call you Tinsel? :D) Fixed. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:19, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Fantastic! I think it's too early for the 24 hours, so we'll wait another day for any more comments before putting it on 24 hours. And just so I don't have to edit twice, same goes for your awesome Ivytail image. --  Icy -chan  01:30, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

I managed to wait a grand total of 15 hours. Comments before approval? Sandy  Talk   16:37, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)