Talk:Bramblestar

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 * Family, Mentor, and Apprentice needs to be cited.
 * Moonrise section could use some more information. Expanded to include Feathertail's death --Sandy Leader's Den 20:05, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "Nieces/Nephews" section in Charcat needs to be split into two separate sections. --< &Sigma;ul&atilde;l&iacute;&atilde; (Salamandastron )> 18:48, 15 August 2008 Brambleclaw's apprentice is Berrypaw
 * Article desperately needs the excess links removed. You only need to link to a page once on one page! - I've removed all excess links I could find --Sandy Leader's Den 19:54, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Shouldn't Hollyleaf,Lionblaze,and Jayfeather be added to his familiy section?
 * No, because at the end of Long Shadows, Squirrelflight reveals that she and Brambleclaw aren't their parents.

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 * Firestar's Quest information is needed Eu ( Talk! Contribs ) 23:04, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Extensive Style-editing is needed Eu ( Talk! Contribs ) 23:04, 3 May 2008 (UTC)

One thing

 * Family tree reads,

TigerstarSasha |                  -                   |               |              |               Hawkfrost      Mothwing          Tadpole

When was "Tadpole" mentioned? He's not in the family things, or anything. HollyfireGreystripe's Den 02:17, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

In the "Return to the Clans" cover picture. --!Mal lin ois  02:21, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

Oh. HollyfireGreystripe's Den 02:31, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

Family
is the 'Family' Ok? Brambleclaw14 15:10, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

Actually, no. We don't need the descriptions in the family. G B 57 19:22, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

Ok thanks. Brambleclaw14 19:44, 12 March 2009 (UTC)