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Bumblestripe (W) - Withdrawn


I temporarily withdrew Darkstripe until I could figure out how to make him less blurry. So, here's the newly named Bumblestripe. Yay, first Fading Echoes character for approval! :D Comments? →  Batteh   ←  23:00, March 23, 2010 (UTC)!

This is good. Lighten his pelt color a little. It looks dark compared to his apprentice image. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:05, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on his back look too thick compared to his apprentice image. This is really good, though! -- I c y -  c h a n   s a y s   h e  l l  o !   23:27, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Batteh. He is pretty good... Except the stripes are thick, and then the pelt is 27 gray shades too dark!!! IT'S A CAT-ASTROPHE! (J.K. ;) ) Brightmoon   The Sign of the Moon!  23:29, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't I reserve him?--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:45, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Jeez, Brightflight, chill. I can't really make the stripes "thinner"... I tried to make them thin when I made him. I'll lighten the pelt in a moment. →  Batteh   ←  23:57, March 23, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded - Made pelt lighter, attempted to sharpen stripes. →  Batteh   ←  00:07, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

Theres a darker gray spot around some of the stripes and personally I think his pelt should be just a tiny bit lighter. Nightshine:Blue had it first. I checked the history. Depending on what timezone you're in it might have been shown as the 22nd like it was on mine. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:12, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Any better? →  Batteh   ←  00:26, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

The color is good but his stripes kinda blobed out. sorry, I cant think of a better adjective. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:28, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to repeat what others have already said, but I think the stripes are the only real issue. On his apprentice pic, they're thick on his spine, but thin out to a point... so I'd recommend that you take the cray color of his pelt, and draw on the stripes to make them thin out, then just blur it really well. Other than that he looks good :)  insaneular    Talk  02:33, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I know mister picky here but the stripes on the tail don't look like the ones on his apprentice version~ Moonpelt ~It’s track season~ 03:31, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Woahh, hang on. The charart is nice but Nightshine had him reserved first! :3 In fact, I had him reserved first, after I woke up at midnight, but then decided it wasn't fair to have two Fading Echoes chararts after some messages on the discussion. I was waiting for someone to actually ask nicely if they could do him, so I could remove his name from my 'list.' =/ Brightfrost  of SunClan...  07:41, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

There needs to be a lot more stripes. His apprentice image has stripes that are thin and lots in numbers but the ones here are thicker and there are only a few. ;) Fawnstorm  The Dark Forest are rising...  10:14, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well.. Yeah... but still. The stripes need to be thin, and large in number. Brightmoon  The Sign of the Moon!  20:00, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I completely redid him. I know the haunch stripes look kind of weird, but I don't really know what to do about them... suggestions? →  Batteh   ←  23:15, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

We still need to discuss who is going to do this charart!--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     23:19, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Work it out between the two of you if you're so concerned, Nightshine. Just try and keep it civil... I'm getting sick of all these comments 'didn't I reserve this first?' and 'so-and-so had this reserved!' Almost isn't worth having the current projects table. -.- ...sometimes I wish the whole thing would just disappear. Anyways, just try and work it out between the two of you, please. -- Bramble 03:02, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I thought we'd worked it out, but I guess not. Comments on the image? →  Batteh   ←  11:18, March 25, 2010 (UTC)!

The midriff stripe is really big. Can you sort it out? Didn't Nightshine ask Frosty if she could do it (sorry Barmble XD)? Fawnstorm The Dark Forest are rising...  16:41, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

The middle stripe goes all the way across, making it look strange. If you could also lighten the black on the stripes, that would be great, because they blend in with the lineart too well. I'm not going to interfere with the decision of who keeps this; it's up to you two, if you want to go through the effort. Bramble 21:16, March 26, 2010 (UTC)


 * The stripes also seem a tad sharp to me as well. Blur the edges of them some more.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:13, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sorry he took so long. He looks worse now, in my opinion. I couldn't really lighten the stripes, and I couldn't blur the stripes without making them look too blurred. You people need to teach me how you make your tabby stripes look so smooth. →  Batteh   ←  21:16, March 29, 2010 (UTC)!

It looks a little pixly. Blur the stripes some more, especially the ones on his back. If you can't lighten the stripes, set the dodge tool to highlights, and the strength to 10-15. Then it should lighten a lot better. (Ignore this if you know it already) Rain  whisker  00:02, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


 * The highlight on his chest needs to be blurred as well.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:43, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The second stripe down on his neck looks like it has a stripe around it. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:30, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really do anything. I'm going to let Nightshine do this. Hers was a lot better than mine. c: →   Batteh   ←  21:50, April 4, 2010 (UTC)!


 * o Really!? Thank you! I'll need to have my sharpclaw blanks approved first.--  N i g h t s h i n e     Ü     21:55, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

-sigh- Archiving. ✐Sa NdY  14:48, April 5, 2010 (UTC)