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Deputy Blanks - For Approval
having trouble with the tails :// 22:18 Sun Jan 24

I can give you a redline if youd like splook? Also the back legs feet are bothering me. Perhaps i can show you what would look best in the redline as well? 22:54, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

Tip for the tails, most of the time a cats tail will curl away from their body or lie flat on the ground 23:09, January 24, 2016 (UTC)

I suck at explaining things, so here. I can't quite figure out how to explain how to fix the legs though, and I can't figure out a redline for it. idk 23:34, 01/24/2016

Make the hind paws thicker and the knees should be more well-rounded.

A few suggestions, feel free to ignore them.  17:51 Wed Jan 27 

the blanks are a little too small --Belllastar (talk) 00:21, January 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, they're not. o.o They're about the same size as many of the other blanks we have on here.

The necks look thin to me. However, only tweak it if you feel that you need to. — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  17:54, January 30, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. I did a whole new tail placement that was suggested. I think it's working for the shorthaired, but does the longhair look alright? 02:13 Sun Jan 31

It looks fine to me^^ but I think you can add some more tufts on the back of the tail?

The way the fur swoops up on the chest of the long-haired looks a little too cartoonish compared to the other blanks, at least in my opinion. Consider smoothing that out/making it more realistically fluffy, if that makes sense? It looks cool, don't get me wrong, I just don't think it fits the style of the other blanks. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:08, February 2, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add more "fur lines" on the long hair's tail?

Define the shoulder more and add some more to the lower jaw? 07:05, February 3, 2016 (UTC)

This isn't meant to rush you, but here's a reminder to upload the blanks! I know you're busy, but giving the section a nudge wouldn't hurt... I think. =P Given that you are not bound by the one-week upload limit, this is nothing other than a courtesy or something. I'd say "friendly reminder", but that's usually used in a mocking tone, and you know that's not what I mean.

reuploaded. my apologies with the delay. my new classes for the semester keep me busy on weeknights. 01:06 Sat Feb 6

Comments before approval? 08:40, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The gap between the hind leg and the hind foot reminds me too much of a rabbit... 09:10, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The curved line at the shoulder looks akward can I ask why it is there? 14:56, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

The hindlegs of both the short-haired and long-haired have different lengths to them. I suggest fixing them so they match?

I'm sorry for the massive nitpicky comment, but could you make the shoulder a bit wider, thin out the lines on the front toes some (and maybe shorten them),move the toe on the back foot backwards a tiny bit, move the far back leg forward a bit, make the close haunch attach to the leg a bit lower down, add a tiny bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest and haunch, make the far front foot a little wider, shorten the shorthair tail a tad, make the gap between the upper and lower whisker a bit wider and make the back of the heads attach to the neck a bit higher up (or the jaw a bit lower)? If you don't get what I mean, I'll gladly give a redline to show you. Most of this is optional.  16:01 Sat Feb 6 

It doesn't look like a rabbit, Sagestream, and if it does, can you please tell her what to do, instead of just telling her what you think it looks like? 19:32, February 6, 2016 (UTC)

A redline would be really helpful, Shinx :) Sometimes I get lost on what to do from just reading the text 19:34 Sat Feb 6

Alright, then i think maybe you should shorten the gap between the leg and the foot. it just looks a bit awkward. 02:58, February 7, 2016 (UTC)

I already said that Sage :P Anyway, hope this helps.  10:53 Sun Feb 7 

I think the tail could be raised a few pixels up on the back of the cat, and the neck needs to be thickened a bit ( http://prntscr.com/a1872f ), and the raised paw should be backed up a few pixels and made smaller. The tum could be dropped a pixel or two, and the ears made a bit neater. The longhair should probably have long fur all the way up to the chin too, as well as the shoulder being fuzzy. 23:45, 02/9/2016

reuploaded. thanks so much, i think they look a lot better now. 02:41 Tue Feb 16

Comments before approval? 03:59, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Add white to the chararts so they look like the other blanks. Great job! ^_^

Sorry for bothering you again but could you add a little bit more fluff to the bottom of the longhair's chest while you're at it? Just one or two lines will do.  16:58 Tue Feb 16 

Can I ask why the blanks have to be white? 17:29 16/2/16

It's just below the lineart, Velvet. All of the other blanks have that, so I don't see why these shouldn't. That can be added afterwards, though. And I said the same thing on Skype that I'm gonna say now, the feet are a bit too... flat, for lack of a better word. Using what Berry also said to me, a cat usually walks on their toes, so the only way they'd be completely flat is if they're sitting.

As I said on Skype, the picture Splook based this off has the cat in the exact same pose with her legs on the ground. In fact, my cats' legs are on the ground when she's asking for food in the same position. :/ 04:29, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

The back legs would be up in the air a little bit, as per Skye. Cats do in fact walk on their toesies. 12:47, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Also sorry foe edit spam but the whiskers that are going <== this way off the blank sre bothering me, since the other whiskers are flat against the side of the face. Basically get rid of those whiskers 12:49, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I think the back legs are fine. I have seen my cat and if you google images of a cat you will find some in this position or with their feet in that position. Just because it's not common doesn't make it inaccurate. 21:03, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Exactly, Velvet. You bring up an amazing point. Anyways, here's a picture of the legs Splook used: They're not on their toes. Splook's legs are fine. 01:37, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

If someone would like to argue the opposite, may you please draw a redline and show me what it would look like if the legs were altered? 02:05 Thu Feb 18

No, you don't need to change it becuase it's fine. I provided proof that cats legs cna look like it and in general, they can. 02:06, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Hey now, chill. She asked for a redline to see what they'd look like, and there's nothing wrong with that. If she chooses to not do so after the redline is given, then that's fine. But since she did ask for one to support the argument against her, then I think she should be given one. (I can't redline, sorry)

I'm not particularly bothered what happens with the back legs, but is this what you guys had in mind?  15:18 Thu Feb 18 

I can do a redline later, but for now, I'd agree with what others are saying and say that something with the back legs needs to be changed. Yes, cats can lower themselves entirely on the "heel" of their leg (for lack of a better term). But the upper part of the leg would be more stretched out if that were the case, because if the rear is that high in the air, the leg needs to stretch out to compensate for the lower part of the leg being on the ground. You can see it in the picture Icy provided; yes, the lower leg is all on the ground, and you can see how the rear end doesn't appear to be low to the ground, but closer to even with the shoulders. But you can see how the "thigh" (I really don't know the proper words for cat anatomy) is stretch out, not rounded and curled up like drawn here, because it has to stretch out to account for the height lost from the lower leg being on the ground. I probably rambled too much and didn't explain myself very clearly, but I'll do a redline later that will hopefully make what I'm trying to say here clearer. ^^ That, or you could go the direction that Shinx is suggesting and take the lower leg off the ground entirely, so you can keep the bend to the upper leg. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:51, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Bellapaw (App) - For Approval
Not sure I matched the shading/texture totally, I might redo that later. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:36, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Wait whoa, the colors don't match at all... what colors did you use, Shinx? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:38, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

In all honesty, I think this is what it should look like; the loner's colours clash too much, and this still matches the desc of pale orange... But that's up to you and Shinx to decide I think? I'd go with these though, to match Firestar more, and still have it match her desc. Also, could you smooth the shading on the chin? 19:12, 02/12/2016

no....this looks very bright orange. 19:16, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

I used the colors in the file you sent me... But no offense, I agree that this looks very bright orange rather than pale.  <span style="">22:23 Fri Feb 12 

I used those colors too. So how did yours end up looking so much paler? What did you do with the highlights/light texture? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:49, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

Absolutely nothing. I only changed the tint on the texture. Perhaps make this color a little paler and see if that looks better? I can colorpick, I don't care. But this isn't pale orange.  <span style="">22:56 Fri Feb 12 

Weird... well, anyway, I can agree that it's not bright enough. Can you send me the colors you used, or something? I want to make sure it matches. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:08, February 13, 2016 (UTC)


 * 1) efa370 is what I have.

And I'm going to be honest here.... Firestar's images are a very bright orange. Pale orange would be a lot less bright. ( "2. of a low degree of chroma, saturation, or purity; approaching white or gray: 3. not bright or brilliant; dim:" 'pale' according to the dictionary.) I don't mind changing the colors on my image. I really don't. But you guys are asking for both bright orange and pale orange at the same time. I have been playing with the colors all week and can't get anything even close to Firestar's colors while still being pale orange. Ive colorpicked from Firestar (or more specifically, Jake's file. Which is the same color.) and tried to make it paler. Doesn't work out. I've messed with the colors I have now. Doesn't work out. I just spent about half an hour playing with the colors on this image to see if I can make them pale. I've tried to make entirely new colors, I've used dodge and burn, I've tried color sliders, everything I could possibly think of. Unless I have a really screwed up definition of pale, I don't think it's possible. So uh, sorry guys?

If by some miracle you guys find a color that works out then sure (Jayie's color here is nice, but it's not pale. It's bright. And tbh we should be trying to match the "pale orange" description more than the "Looks like firestar" description.), I'll use it. But I'm done with the colors. Especially considering "looking like Firestar" doesn't necessarily mean they have the same pelt color. Sorry for the big long paragraph. I didn't mean for it to get that long :/  <span style="">10:24 Sat Feb 13 

the priority should be her actual description. a lot of things could make her look like firestar - exact colour isny neccessarily one of them. 12:20, February 13, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, what's going on with this? o.o

Sorry, I got busy with school. I'll work on it tonight to lighten it to match Shinx's image. Sorry for the confusion and the wait. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:59, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I used the color you mentioned, Shinx. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:47, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC) - For Approval
protect runningnose <span style="">20:06 Fri Feb 12

Define the light on the left foreleg a little. Precious kitty. 22:30, February 12, 2016 (UTC)

The patchy fur should have black lines not grey? <span style="">16:33, 02/13/2016

The leader, deputy, and old MC blanks all had gray lines, so I think it's okay. And it is black, I just lightened the opacity. <span style="">19:38 Sat Feb 13

I'm the OA of the deputy, and it has black lines. Besides, it's line art, so it should be black. <span style="">14:40, 02/14/2016

Also, his eyes should be rheumy, look closely at the old version, there's a little dark spot under each eye. Also, there should probably be actual mucus coming from his nose, not just little speckles. <span style="">19:02, 02/14/2016

Define the shading just a tad on the legs and tail. 14:38, February 15, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded. okay well then nominate the other images for a tweak because that lineart is surely not black. <span style="">02:58 Tue Feb 16

It may just be my screen, but define the snot just a tad? I can't see it too well. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 14:00, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

I can see it just fine. Comments before approval? 17:32, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the light on the tail needs to be defined- it looks almost like it's all in shading. I also think the head shading might need a tiny bit of definition too, and the light on <-- front leg could be defined as well.

shading is leaking on the booty i think 12:28, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Lulu (K) ~ For Approval
Im proud of this. 03:20, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

whoop, i need to match the other, i didnt see that there. Ill get it later. 04:05, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

I love how you made the eyes different colored,so i change my kittypet's eyes too :D 19:06, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Define shading on the hindpaw?

The shading in general needs to be defined, expanded, and lightened. 17:16, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

re-up i redid the whole fricken thing, i see some errors, ill fix em. 00:23, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

The other image seems... a bit softer, for lack of a better word? Also, define the shading.

Fawnstep (MC) ~ For Approval
I like this one 17:30, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

changes 17:33, February 16, 2016 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes. 17:16, February 17, 2016 (UTC)

Brighten up the front paws a bit.

Reups 21:13, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Violet (KP) (Q) - For Approval
I will be working on the stripes. Even though it's a different view, I am not sure what I think of it. And it doesn't really match the original style well...so please do not comment on that; I already know. <span style="">01:11 Thu Feb 18

Which image did you get the base color from? It seems a tiny bit darker on this than it does her kittypet. Might be my eyes, though.

Can you fix the collar so it looks like its facing down? It looks a tad awkward when it's facing straight up.

I color picked from the rogue in the lightest spot I could find. I will compare and/or it if needed when I am done with the work for my classes. <span style="">20:55 Thu Feb 18

You actually should have colorpicked from the kittypet; that image is the first in the set, and all images are required to match that one.

Reuploaded Colorpicked from kittypet and it was the same. Also fixed the style of the stripes. <span style="">00:25 Sat Feb 20

The kittypet still looks a lot lighter than this? I'm not sure how to suggest to fix that though... Try colorpicking from a few different areas? <span style="">01:59, 02/20/2016

Reuploaded I added a light highlight layer to attempt fixing it. I'm honestly not sure why it looks so different. I colorpicked from the absolute lightest spot I could find on two of the images. The base I used was the color I got each time. <span style="">02:41 Sat Feb 20

Echosong (MC) - For Approval
I think the shading was tinted on the original MC... but I tried. I'll define the shading on the white tomorrow. I also need to smudge the leg stripes more...

Expand / define the shading on the body. 04:34, February 18, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I defined it, but only expanded it on the stomach- this is actually a slightly tweaked version of Cloudberry's shading oops.

The stripes should be thicker and more solid, and smudge along the edges, not in the direction of fur flow. Smooth out the white on the chest, as it's not smudged quite as much on the warrior. Basically, her entire pattern is like... marble, for lack of a better word. I suggest using the most solid round brush in the brushes panel to smudge the stripes at like, size 2 or 3, and lower the rate if you need to. Keep another image open next to it as you work (assuming you don't already do that). That's what I do to help match patterns/styles. Also, smooth out the shading a bit. <span style="">21:51, 02/19/2016

Re-uploaded. It wasn't even smudged on the chest, really... Have this for now, because I am much too drained to try and match these even better right now; so that means don't comment on the stripes.

Sloefur (MC) ~ For Approval
the shading makes me want to cry 01:33, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

smooth out the shading? why is shading black cats another hell? 12:37, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried 22:45, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) - For Approval
yup definitely crazy... 08:52, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Crop the image and define shading on the head? 11:15, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:57, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Scar, I hate to tell you this but it looks like someone had this reserved two days before you did. <span style="">00:05, 02/20/2016

wait dammit that's cinderheart not pelt, sorry x.x I'm too tired for this <span style="">00:06, 02/20/2016

Goosefeather (MC) ~ For Approval
All colors from his StarClan image, which I do have the file for. Comments? 19:17, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. The darkness itself is fine, but it looks a bit too flat in some places, such as the legs and face.

Reuploaded. 00:16, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

Mossheart (MC) - For Approval
19:51, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Upload under this file, please. =P

Re-upsHow could i forget mc from the filename o-o 10:31, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MC) - For Approval
19:51, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Lengthen the whiskers a little bit.  <span style="">22:14 Fri Feb 19 

Flametail (MC) - For Approval
i love ginger cats <span style="">21:43, 02/19/2016

Cinderpelt (Alt MC 3) ~ For Approval
21:52, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

This should be lighter I think? The description for this alt is pale grey, and this looks just grey. Think something like Featherwhisker. Also, define earpink and smooth the shading on the chest. <span style="">21:55, 02/19/2016

Ravenpaw (W) - For Approval
My sweet little Raven. 23:13, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Shrink the white on his chest to better match the other images. 23:39, February 19, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the haunch and shoulder and face. Also, you can make the eyes have more colour in it (http://prntscr.com/a5ip7u just add color where the red is in this image on your image) so they eyes aren't quite as small and hard to see the colour of. Brighten the white as well, and make sure it covers the whole tail tip; it looks like it's peeling away from the edges. <span style="">23:50, 02/19/2016

Reupload fixed the eye problem and fixed shading also fixed white patches. 00:07, February 20, 2016 (UTC)

The white on the chest still needs to be a lot smaller like the red spot, and don't forget to smooth/blur the shading in the places I said. he is tiny and i love him <span style="">00:11, 02/20/2016

Kestrelwing (MC) - For Approval
I was gonna match the other one but it wasn't even dark brown so I just changed it completely, since it was the only one in the set (minus the alt). <span style="">00:59, 02/20/2016