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Cinderheart - Silver Nomination
Cinderheart's article is well-done, expanded enough, as it is how long she appears in books. I think it's fine and ready for silver status. Comments? Icestorm Trick or treat! 02:25, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Outcast and Long Shadows could be expanded. Also, I removed two quotes that didn't show any of her personality, try to find some more. 02:34, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Fading Echoes and the ones Whitestorm listed above can be expanded. 02:37, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

The Sight could be expanded a bit more (if possible), and so could Sunrise. River pelt Deputy of StormClan 12:45, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think Sunrise could be expanded any more, since she is barely seen in it. 17:51, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think Frostheart is right, I tried to expand it some more, but it can't be. 02:29, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded it. I'll look for quotes soon. 21:22, October 11, 2010 (UTC)

I cited the family tree some more. I cannot see anything wrong about this (except for the fact about the quotes). Good job. 04:25, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Icestorm, are you still working on this? River pelt Happy Halloween! 12:17, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

She needs a main quote and could use some other ones too; currently she only has one. Otherwise, good job! ^^ 00:06, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

The family tree still needs one more cite, but that's very minor. XD I can't see anything wrong except for the quotes.

Just the family tree needs expanding. Clarrissa  My Talk Page  13:54, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know what you mean by "expanding" the family tree, but I added the citation for Frostfur. To Icestorm: for the citations, there is a lot of members, cited as being revealed in Sunset, such as Cinderpelt and Brightheart. Those citations need to be changed to when they were revealed to be related to Brackenfur, so Cinderpelt's should be somewhere in Fire and Ice, and Brightheart's should be in Forest of Secrets. I hope you understand what I mean. xD 22:47, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Gah. Sorry, the edit didn't show my signature, again. XD Just a glitch. :/ 04:04, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. I added a main quote. And fixing the ciations? I'll do that soon. 01:13, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Squirrelflight - Silver Nomination
I got her family section sorted out and added some quotes. She is definitely ready. 03:31, October 12, 2010 (UTC)

Most of the history could be expanded. 03:52, October 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * I do not know about PO3 as I did not read it, but the NP section needs expansion. For instance, in Midnight, the journey should be presented in much more detail; many events are missing (e.g. when they get separated, when Squirrelpaw saves Feathertail from the Twoleg kit, when she senses Leafpaw's message about the burdock root due to their bond etc). In Dawn, both the return and the journey can be more detailed; and in Starlight, the exploring of the lake (for instance, when she jumps into the Twoleg garden where Jake and Susan is, or when they rest at the Sky Oak). I might be able to help out with it this weekend, but I don't know how much time will I have, so don't take this as a promise. ;) Kind regards, 12:50, October 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Whitestorm, are you still working on this? :3 It's just that you haven't edited it much since you put the nomination up. Anyways, I cannot see anything wrong except for the need of expansion. 04:10, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it is just really slow going. xD I am about done though. 22:48, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Lionstar - Silver Nomination
I added a few quotes and fixed some things in his history. It looks ready to me-- 23:18, October 13, 2010 (UTC)

It looks pretty good. Could Code of The Clans be expanded any more? If not, good job. 23:20, October 13, 2010 (UTC)

I lengthened it as much as I could- 00:41, October 14, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. :) 20:59, October 14, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed. 19:11, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before the vote? 20:40, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Vote is up. Please excuse the delay. 00:22, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Featured Article - November 10
I keep putting this up, so I finally am getting it up here. So, who do you guys think the featured article should be for November? I wanted to get this up early since we have been behind lately. Some articles that I've seen that could work are Tawnypelt. Also, Sandstorm and Squirrelflight could both be featured with just a littel bit of expansion, and since they were both major characters, it would be a good idea. I have Squirrelflight's silver nomination up now, so I will expand it some this weekend. So, would any of those be good, or do you have other suggestions? 20:43, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps Jayfeather? His article looks good enough to be featured :) 20:49, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, we could definitely add Jayfeather to the list of possible options. 20:52, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool, maybe? 20:54, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool, yes. Or maybe Stormfur? 8D 21:00, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

What about Dovepaw? River pelt Happy Halloween!21:02, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Dovepaw doesn't seem like a good idea to me, her character is just starting to develop. Stormfur's article still needs more work, Icestorm :D 21:15, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

I do not think Dovepaw is ready to be featured, honestly. I really want to get some more Skyclan characters up there, maybe Leafstar or Billystorm? I think those two are the best. If not, maybe Whitestorm? 22:46, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, Whitestorm sounds like a good featured article. Even Leafstar or Billystorm. River pelt Happy Halloween!22:52, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think Speckletail has a really great article. Even is she isn't one of the most important characters. I'd really like to see her article become gold one day.-- 23:34, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool and Dovepaw: Probably not because they are both probably going to have a big part in the next coming books.

Stormfur and Billystorm: They could both use some work such as style of history and such.

Speckletail and Whitestorm: They could both work.

So, we have Speckletail, Whitestorm, Squirrelflight, Sandstorm, and Tawnypelt as possible choices as of. Anybody else have anything to add, or think I was wrong and one of the articles that I said couldn't be featured, could be. XD I am still looking for opinions from members. 02:39, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

LEAFSTAR! XD Anyways, I think Whitestorm could work. But not Squirrelflight. She needs a lot of history work. 02:58, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather? :\ And I agree with Frostheart about Squirrelflight. 02:59, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! I forgot about Leafstar and Jayfeather. In my opinion, Whitestorm, Leafstar, Jayfeather, or Tawnypelt could all work. What do you guys think? 03:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Those are the ones that I think are the best. 03:12, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think those are good articles, but Speckletail is just one that I think would be great for a feature article-- 03:25, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think it should be either Leafstar or Jayfeather. 03:26, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

I vote for Squirrelflight (needs minor expansion as indicated previously, but that can be fixed in no time). 06:45, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

I am working on expanding Squirrelflight right now, and I vote for her as well. 17:47, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

My vote is for Speckletail-- 17:59, October 16, 2010 (UTC}

Jayfeather. 19:20, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, since people are starting to vote, I'm going to put up a formal vote. 20:01, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ugh. You took my idea. :P I was going to do that. XD Anyways, go ahead. :) 20:04, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

LOL sorry. :P Anyway the vote is up. Cast you votes there. 20:19, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather has been chosen, but the "official" vote is now up. xD 02:09, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderstar - Silver Nomination
Well, Maplefern had this up before, but it was archived, so I'm re-nominating him :) 22:21, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! I don't see anything that needs fixing- 22:50, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Good job, Oblivion! =) River pelt Happy Halloween! 19:11, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Looks better than last time he was nominated. Supporting. 23:50, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. =) 02:49, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before the vote? 01:59, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Not yet. :P 21:40, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

I know, my bad. 21:43, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, know I can. xD Comments before the vote? 13:27, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Vote is up. 23:20, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefang~Silver Nomination
Well, I made her elder charart, and I figured I might as well fix up her page. Comments? River pelt Happy Halloween! 22:30, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

All of the sections could be expanded a bit more. Is there any more information to be found? Can you find one more quote?-- 22:49, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Not any good quotes, she only says like three quotes total, but the third one isn't good. All of her sections are filled up as far as they can go, I've checked every book. River pelt Happy Halloween! 00:25, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

If that is all that can be added, then it looks fine. 23:54, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. 05:14, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. =) 17:46, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

The main quote needs punctuation at the end XD, but otherwise, nice! Supporting :D 19:18, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed it. Thanks for the heads up, Midnitesky! River pelt Happy Halloween! 19:36, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

No problem. ;) I also expanded Battles of the Clans a bit more for you; I hope you don't mind! 19:43, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

All the history looks good. I fixed a problem with Oakstep as her apprentice. The only citation provided, was on Firestar's Quest, pg 189, but it doesn't verify that he was Mousefang's apprentice, so I removed it. 13:30, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, thanks Midnitesky and Whitestorm! River pelt Happy Halloween!

14:12, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Mistystar - Silver Nomination
I think her article looks really good! 19:57, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Forest of Secrets and Sunset could be smoothed out and shortened. 20:03, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Rising Storm, Midnight, Twilight, and Dark River could also be expanded if possible. Actually most of her history could be expanded. River pelt Happy Halloween! 22:37, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

I've expanded A Dangerous Path and Moonrise by adding a few details that were left out; I'll work on the rest later. Unfortunately, Mistystar doesn't appear in Rising Storm much so I'll take a look at the other books you've listed, Riverpelt. :) 00:33, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Rising Storm, All of NP, minus Sunset, The Sight, and Cats of the Clans could all be expanded. Also, she needs another quote. 00:42, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Moonrise, Dawn, Starlight, and Twilight to the best I could (I edited when I wasn't logged in :P); I'll get to work on Midnight, The Sight, and CotC later. Thanks for the suggestions, Whitestorm! 01:11, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Rising Storm, A Dangerous Path, The Darkest Hour, all of the NP section, and CotC. 02:48, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I've expanded The Darkest Hour (a LOT), and CotC, plus I've added 2 quotes (one of which I really like, "I'll always be grateful for what you did, but I'm a RiverClan cat at heart"). Please note, that because I do not own Rising Storm or A Dangerous Path, I cannot expand them anymore. I've checked the cliffnotes and I've gone to Borders a few times to polish up things, but I simply can't find anything else. I'll get to work on Midnight and the Sight now, but if anyone else can help me, it will be greatly appreciated. Also, please, do not repeat things that other users have said, because I am working on it (Ex: NP=Midnight and the other books in that series; please do not repeat that). Thanks, 18:55, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Rising Storm and A Dangerous Path for you Midnitesky. River pelt Happy Halloween! 21:38, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Riverpelt, that helped! ^-^ Midnitesky 22:04, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Unfortunately, I can't expand The Sight, but I've expanded Midnight :) 20:17, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, Midnite. I can see you have worked really hard on this. Excellent Work! :) Anyways, the part in Moonrise when Reedpaw falls into the river could be expanded. Also, I think she was seen more in Dark River. Besides that, it looks great! 21:17, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks ^-^ I'll dig into the Cliffnotes and borrow some books from my library to polish it up a bit. 00:05, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Moonrise expanded (thanks to my library book). :) I'll get to work on Dark River now. 19:13, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darn it, the library doesn't have Dark River! :( If anybody else can expand it, that would be appreciated, but I'll try my best to scour for a copy. :) 20:32, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded it. I believe hose are the only two significant appearances she made. 01:26, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I could have sworn she appeared more in Dark River. 02:03, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Frostheart ;) 19:07, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. I'm sure. I recently re-read Dark River. 02:05, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, then it looks fine. 13:32, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowflight - Silver Nomination
How does he look? 01:47, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed some grammar mistakes. He looks great. :) 02:46, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Can any quotes be added? 11:01, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, probably. I can work on it later tonight. 20:54, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I added a quote and a main quote. 21:35, October 24, 2010 (UTC)\

That looks better. 13:33, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Fallensnow - Silver Nomination
I think the article looks good for silver. 20:59, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good since Fallensnow is mentioned in like 2 pages. XD 21:11, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, her article does look awesome-considering she appeared like one time and has nearly no part at all xD 23:59, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I support. Great job, Oblivion! River pelt Happy Halloween! 04:52, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

We are currently deciding if characters that never even appeared in the series, should be granted silver status. This will be stalled for the time being. Sorry, 20:59, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for the delayment. This nomination can be resumed. 03:33, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Sunpelt - Silver Nomination
Her article looks pretty good for a minor character. 21:07, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'm supporting. Except, we don't know if Sunpelt is a tom or a she-cat xD 21:28, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I support as well. =) River pelt Happy Halloween! 04:54, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Supporting. 15:21, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

We are currently discussing if characters that never even appeared in the series, should be granted silver status. This will be stalled for the time being. Sorry, 21:02, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay. This nomination can be resumed now. 03:39, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfur - Silver Nomination
His article looks good. Comments? 05:09, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

He needs a couple quotes, and one of them has to be a main quote. River pelt Happy Halloween! 14:49, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Battles of the Clans could be expanded: maybe into paragraphs. 15:20, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Added quotes and I'll get on the Battle of the Clans part. 15:22, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Done. 16:07, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed some grammar mistakes. Supporting =) 21:50, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Can the history be expanded anymore? Also, find another quote. 01:33, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Done 02:27, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good. Supporting. 20:18, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Good job, Frostheart! =) River pelt Happy Halloween!

23:27, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

So...anything to do? XD 03:54, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Duststar - Silver Nomination
Not that there's much to his article. xD 20:43, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Needs a citation for being a tom, and more quotes need to be added. 20:56, October 25, 2010 (UTC)


 * Do they really need citations for being a certain gender? If they don't have a description, I don't think a reference is needed :\ 20:57, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

All character article should have a reference for the gender, whether or not they have a description. Sorry if I sound bossy, but that's the way it is. :) 21:08, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Got the reference! You could tell Duststar was a tom because there were alot of "him" and "his" in there. XD River pelt Happy Halloween!

23:26, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Whew, you're a fast one for getting references, Riverpelt! Thanks :) I'll try to get Code of the Clans from the library to dig for a quote. 00:04, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I got Code of the Clans from the library (yay!) and I added a quote. 19:14, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Can another quote be added? I know he is a pretty minor character. 22:51, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... Well, I'll search for a good quote, but I don't know...:/ 00:20, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think CotC can be expanded, I honestly haven't read it in awhile, but I'm pretty sure he's seen more than that. 03:55, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, Duststar is only seen in that section of CotC, to my knowledge, but none the less, I've tried my best to expand it. Although I'm out of quotes. He did say "A truce?", but that's basically useless to the article. :P 20:30, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

The CotC section looks better now. :) I can't see anything wrong except for maybe the quote. XD 01:23, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'll have to look for a good quote... Better get to work! ;) 19:09, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Join?
Hi, I'm Spottedpool76 and I think project characters looks really cool and I would really like to join. Would this be ok? Thanks, Spottedpool76 00:37, October 26, 2010 (UTC) also, sorry if the link on my siggie isnt working, i'm still new and I'm trying to sort it out :)

Hey Spottedpool! :) Of course you can join the project, and I have added you in. If you have any questions, check out the front page, read the FAQ, or ask any experienced member. Also, about your signature problems, until your siggy is working, you can type in 4 ~'s and it will place your signature. Thanks for your intrest in joining us! :) 01:01, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleclaw - Gold Nomination
I know Brambleclaw needs a lot of work, but I'm excited to do it. :) Comments and criticism, please. 14:32, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Aww man! I was going to put Brambleclaw up for gold too! Just kidding! XD I was going to, but I'll definetely help you out Frostheart. =D You just have to expand some of his NP history, Outcast, The Sight, Eclipse and Long Shadows. River pelt Happy Halloween!

21:11, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Riverpelt. :) And I was going to expand that later tonight, since I don't have anything to do tonight. :) 21:25, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Expanded Outcast, it has some like...grammar issues, XD But I'll fix that later on. :) 00:20, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

If it is to be gold, all most all of the history should be expanded. 02:05, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I think Brambleclaw looks really good! I can see you've been working very hard on this ;) Just expand New Prophecy and a little bit of Power of Three and I think it's nearly gold quality! :) 19:13, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Outcast, Midnight, fixed Brightspirit's Mercy, expanded Dark River, and Moonrise. :) I'll get on the rest! -zooms off like awesomeness- 00:54, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded The Sight. But I cannot expand Eclipse, since he was..in it like..2..3 times? XD And I cannot expand Long Shadows, either. Since mostly, he was just organizing patrols all the time. So I believe that is all of it, but I'll get on the other sections that I think could need expansion. 01:12, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Dawn needs to be expanded as well as Fading Echoes-- 01:45, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Expanded Dawn. Fading Echoes can't be expanded. 02:29, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

If he is to be gold, all of NP should be expanded. Also, even though he only appeared once in Fading Echoes, that one appearance can be expanded. 13:33, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Midnight a ton, but it might be too much..XD I'll expand all of them like that, if they need summarizing, I can do that. Also, they may hold grammar mistakes, but I always get to that after expanding. 15:06, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded all of NP except for Sunset, which I'll do now. By the way, Midnight and Starlight are typically longer than the others in NP because he is seen more in it. 20:15, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sasha - Silver Nomination
Her article looks like it's good enough for silver. Comments?-- 01:28, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

It looks pretty good. Can Dawn be expanded more? 01:44, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

She needs a main quote and some other quotes. Her history looks good, though. :) 12:52, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, Dawn can be expanded. History looks amazing, though. =) 13:28, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. =) Nightshine, if you need any help with the quotes, I'll be glad to help. River pelt Happy Halloween! 13:33, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I expanded Dawn and added quotes-- 22:58, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

That looks better. 23:11, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe~Gold Nomination
I just figured I'd put him up now, but I know that there is alot to fix. So any books that need fixing? River pelt Happy Halloween! 14:11, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can't say that most of the books need expansion, since if they did, I would have probably expanded them during the time when I had the silver nom. XD Maybe fix the grammar mistakes? There is a few, but not a whole lot. Maybe the Warriors Refuge section could be expanded..? 14:46, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Riverpelt, I am not just picking on you, because I have seen a few other users do this as well. Please do not nominate a character if you know that the article still needs to be fixed, because it wastes space on the talk page. Also. this article was just very recently granted silver status, so it would not be a very good idea to grant it Gold this soon. 18:02, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry Whitestorm! I had a feeling I should've fixed his page up first! If you all want, it will be fine with me if you archive it. River pelt Happy Halloween! 19:13, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

No, I have no problem with this being up. I was just reminding you for future reference. However, I still stand by my point that he was recently granted silve, so it might be a bad idea to give the article Gold already. 21:24, October 30, 2010 (UTC)