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Hailstar (K) ~ CBA
He's so cute :). Burntclaw (talk) 09:03, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded couldn't find the xcf file for it so I had to redraw it :/Burntclaw (talk) 09:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Hum... The shading seems a bit misplaced, there is some shading on his left cheek. Correct me if I'm wrong. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:04, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. By the way, I accidentally used my sister's account to re-upload the picture, so it will say it has been re-uploaded by The Fox Girl. Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups removed some waste.

Darken the base coat a tad, and define the light on the legs. 12:56 Sun Nov 16

Re-uploaded I'm pretty sure the coat color was fine... Cause I color picked from his apprentice version, but I darkened it like you said so. I also defined the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 13:11, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. 13:13 Sun Nov 16

Just removed it as soon as I realized after the re upload :'D Burntclaw (talk) 13:16, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy, smooth it out? 13:17 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups. Is it better? Burntclaw (talk) 13:18, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

It still looks rather blotchy; you can try blurring it with the blur tool at rate 100 instead of using gaussian blur, and it's causing some of the shading to recede at the lineart. I can't see where your light source is, either. Also, there's waste all around the image. 16:22 Sun Nov 16

Re-ups Completely re-did the shading. Never realized shading was so complicated :'D. Also removed all of the waste. Burntclaw (talk) 04:11, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

There's still waste The Fox Girl (talk) 04:30, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Burntclaw (talk) 05:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Give the shading a good blur/smudge. Look at examples of other solid coloured cats for help. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure if I overdid it. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more, and define it in the legs. Also, every time you do something, make sure to select outside the lineart and erase on every layer, because there's still waste. 07:14, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I hope changes are showing, because the internet is being weird again. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 07:18, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make the eyes look a bit more yellow, like his Starclan image? Brick  The Bite of '87  15:50, November 17, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the eyes are fine, can you get rid of the waste and define the shading a tad please. 16:01 Mon Nov 17

Re-ups Not sure if I got ridden of all the waste Burntclaw (talk) 04:01, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Getting rid of all the waste can be a pain with long-furs. Zoom in really close to find it all. It's a smaller image so it won't be much of a hustle. Look especially around the spiky parts of the fur, there is one pixel wastes hiding there. Also, can you darken the shading slightly? --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:29, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure I've gotten rid of all the waste. Just worried that changes aren't showing because of my internet -_-. Also darkened the shading. Burntclaw (talk) 05:56, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got it! Now, the shading is leaking away from the lineart, meaning it's not right next to the lineart. Even one pixel off is noticeable. Try even moving the shading to the right or carefully add more shading so it will be alined. --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:17, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I fixed the problem. XD Burntclaw (talk) 06:27, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

You got his left shoulder, can you do the same with the rest of shading? The rest of his side, legs and tail I think where it needs work.--Stealthfire star (talk) 06:34, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Jeez, I didn't know shading was so complicated! :D Pretty sure I got this right. Burntclaw (talk) 07:09, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I think with solid cats is especially focused. It's still leaking away from the lineart. Look really closely to see the gaps. Look at other pictures for examples. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:25, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 07:32, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Much better! At his side, lighten the shading slightly and make sure there is shading on his spiked fur and all his back paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:40, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

I spy a little waste at his side The Fox Girl (talk) 12:18, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not sure if I made things worse -_- Also, accidentaly used my sister's account to reupload it again :/ Burntclaw (talk) 13:23, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Naw. It's fine, as an artist never doubt yourself, believe in your own work. I've been an artist(in real life. on here for only a couple of years) for many years, first thing I had to learn was to believe in my painting or drawing or even my image on here. Now that I've done my pep talk xD, it looks like the shading is receding from the lineart on the tail, and the back especially. If you add more shading along the lineart it'll fix right up. =) 14:04, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 08:41, November 19, 2014 (UTC)

Still seeing waste around the image. Sometimes when the fancy ways don't work, just take a size one hard-edge eraser and go erase it pixel by pixel. 16:00, November 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm pretty sure all the waste is gone. Also, I was just wondering, how do you become an apprentice? Burntclaw (talk) 08:54, November 22, 2014 (UTC)

If a senior warrior, deputy, or leader thinks you know what you're doing, they can promote you to apprentice. Which I'll go ahead and do. 10:56, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! :) Burntclaw (talk) 11:06, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

There's still a little waste underneath every hair spike on ---> this side. And I see a pixel or two in between his legs. 13:30, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups btw I used my sis's account to upload it Burntclaw (talk) 12:36, November 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink and face shading some? 21:27, 11/24/2014

Smooth out the shading, too. And I think there are still a few pixels of waste in between the fur spikes over here > ^^ 01:58, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

If there is more waste call me a mouse. Burntclaw (talk) 05:09, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the earpink is fine. The Fox Girl (talk) 09:03, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Ferk, actually. Please define the earpink. 10:28, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 10:36, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

I still can hardly see it, please define it more. 10:44, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay, it's defintely visible now. Burntclaw (talk) 12:26, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and that blotchy bit on the part below the (our right) shoulder. Also, are there two white pixels in his back foot? 20:41, November 25, 2014 (UTC)

It looks like the shading's leaking away around here and a bit on the legs, but that could be my eyes. Regardless, this is a really good image- well done!

Re-ups Thanks! :) Burntclaw (talk) 08:46, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Extend the tail shading to the tip, please. Also; is your shading layer on top of your earpink layer? One side looks darker than the other on my screen; Mind fixing that? if not, its completely fine. =)-- 23:40, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

Please remember to sign with 4 tildes (~'s). And why is having the shading layer on top of the earpink layer bad?? I /always/ have my shading layers above the earpink layer. Ears have shading too, so I think that's fine. But I do agree about the tail shading, and it's also leaking away from the tail lineart ^^ 23:49, November 26, 2014 (UTC)

It honestly does not matter either way if the shading layer is above or below the ear pink. I personally put my ear pink above the layer of shading, since it's smudged and blurred so much you can barely see it in most cases anyways. Commenting solely for ear pink unless it's like neon pink or purple really isn't necessary- it's fine as it is and each person will make it differently. There's no one way to do the ear pink on any of these blanks.

My bad; I forgot to sign with my signature. And alright =). My comment on the tail shading still stands, though. Could you also define the light on the front legs a bit, while your at it? I can barely see it.-- 00:02, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Burntclaw (talk) 08:56, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs? Nice job, he's cute c: 21:13, 11/28/2014

I personally can clearly see the light on the legs clearly. :$ but thanks for the compliment! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:11, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups oops. Anyway, sorry! Stupid Fox Girl I used her account AGAIN Burntclaw (talk) 06:23, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Alrighty, since I really want you to get this approved, I went through and circled some major problems in the image. Red = Waste, Yellow = Stray pixel that didn't get shaded, and Green = Shading that is leaking away from the lineart. I really hope this helps; this is a lovely image. =) Here it is. 18:34, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I'll reupload later, :p right now I don't have the computer Burntclaw (talk) 03:16, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Ta-da! Hehe Burntclaw (talk) 05:18, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? This is lovely. 16:25, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Jake (Ki) ~ For Approval
He has a cite, so I can post this, right? 13:12, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

So adorable! Lighten up the face shading a tad? Burntclaw (talk) 13:35, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, it's the same shade as the rest of the shading, and it's not that dark V_V 14:29, November 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the tail. I can't tell they're there.

Reups 10:42, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define them again; still can't see them. I love this a lot he's adorable. =) 14:59, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes on his tail look fine, tbh. Define the leg shading just a little bit? 16:49, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reup 18:35, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

He looks very bright compared to his kittypet image. Maybe darken him a tad? — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:22, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's the same color. I colorpicked from it, and the only reason it looks that way is the shading on the kittypet, and the highlights on this. I will ask for the file, though, so I can make it match 110%. 13:56, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reups it definately matches now; got the file. 12:57, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Hmmm define the shading on the collar. Niiiiiice B) 00:41, 12/2/2014

Smokepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
prepare yourselves for a kit party! XD The shading isn't as bad as I thought it would be. --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:31, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. This is gorgeous though! The Fox Girl (talk) 02:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I really love everything about this picture! Could you lighten the face a smudge? NikiandCats (talk) 10:11, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:21, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can hardly se it. 09:27 Fri Nov 28

Define your light source please. Burntclaw (talk) 13:05, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:10, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is cute!

Reupload thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 01:25, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to give it some depth? 03:49, 11/30/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:10, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

He still looks flat. Try to blur it at a lower rate than you normally do. Also, define the shading on the legs. 04:24, 11/30/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:06, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Ok, instead of defining shading, we're gonna define the light. Define the light on the legs and tail. That should do the trick. 00:40, 12/2/2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:39, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Pinestar (Ki) - For Approval
Hi, my name is Jayce and I really love Pinestar. Have a baby version of him. PC implemented a thing saying all cats with confirmed littermates or parents get kit ranks, so here we go.

Blur the shading a bit more on the neck? Burntclaw (talk) 07:55, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you define the shading inbetween the legs a bit more? I love this=) 23:13, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I can see it pretty good, so I'll hold off on that for now. I don't like making that area overly dark since it usually just distorts the colors when I shade...mainly because I'm using black on this lmao.

Yeah, I can see it, it's fine, Jayce ^^ 03:49, 11/30/2014

Um just noticed this..define your lightsource; the face & tail says it's going this < way and the body and legs say it's going > this way. 19:24, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, I've used this source on all of my kits, as have many users before me. So, unless I get another opinion, I'd rather not change it. It's a fairly common and simple one and one I was told by many users was okay before.

It's fine, although could I ask you to define the shading on the legs a tiiiiiiiiiiiiny bit? 21:43, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Figured that was coming lmao.

Moonflower (Kit) ~ For Approval
I bet in three seconds, someone will tell me to either redo the stripes or define the shading. The Fox Girl (talk) 08:18, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tiny bit? 10:36, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Not happy about the stripes :\ by the way, if this image gets approved, will I become a warrior? (this is my third image) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups My sis told me to define the tail shading The Fox Girl (talk) 11:44, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

define the light on the right front paw? Nicely done! 21:08, 11/28/2014

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 06:29, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the right back paw, as with your lightsource there should be light there. This is gorgeous! =) 19:21, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 04:14, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Snowbird (K) - For Approval
First character ever!! (I'm so proud of myself) Echorunner (talk) 12:50, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, I did it for you. This is amazing! :) maybe blur the shading more? There needs to be nose pink as well. This is very good for your first charart The Fox Girl (talk) 12:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

If you are a kit, it should say "For evaluation" instead of "For Approval"- Anyway, please define the shading on the tail and the legs, but great work! :) Burntclaw (talk) 12:53, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think you can define it everywhere. 13:00 Fri Nov 28

Plus, this should be called File:Snowbird.kit.png. I also fixed the thumbnail. <span style="">13:06 Fri Nov 28

Thanks! I'll remember next time!!!!

Remember to sign your posts with four "~"s, also, when ever you re-upload something, remember to notify us by writing something like Re-ups. XD Btw add shading to the legs plz. If you need help with the placement of the shading you can look at the apprentice tutorials. Also, the file is still not named correctly. Burntclaw (talk) 14:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

To rename it, just rename it in the next upload The Fox Girl (talk) 14:26, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, it makes less work for admins (maybe) if you wait and have an admin rename it for you. 14:54, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please, it's much easier to just let me rename it. Which I just have. I'm also gonna change the heading to "For Approval" since I think this is good for an apprentice-rank promotion tbh.

Along with defining the shading on the legs and tail, maybe add another layer of shading on top of the existing one at a lower opacity ro create some depth? <span style="">21:07, 11/28/2014

Blur the earpink a bit? The Fox Girl (talk) 07:12, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

It looks plenty blurred enough to me. 21:36, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink, actually? <span style="">03:47, 11/30/2014

Sharpen the shading a bit, it looks flat. Burntclaw (talk) 00:15, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Benny (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
I have returned, memes. Comments? 13:24, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tabby stripes? I can barely see them. Lovely image :) The Fox Girl (talk) 14:15, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're fine - for one, they're the same opacity as the ones on the kittypet. 16:51, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, i can see them perfectly fine. Beautiful as always, you meme. <span style="">16:54, 11/28/2014

Blur or smudge the ear pink a bit? It kinda seems a bit "woah" compared to the rest of the image. Not saying that's a bad thing; it's just really bright.

re-up 19:22, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

re-up i tried adding a collar since he's a kittypet and therefore needs one 17:24, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I think the collar would be a bit bigger- they're supposed to be larger on kits.

I was mostly following the collar sizes of the other kits because they aren't very large to begin with ;; 12:43, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

maybe add more shading to the collar? it looks kinda flat 03:52, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Lower the position of the collar. The Fox Girl (talk) 05:04, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I think the collar positioning is fine. Every other KP kit has it there. 19:18, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 19:33, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? <span style="">16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful <span style="">21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? <span style="">03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Mossfire (Kit) ~ For Approval
Here's little Mossy:3 17:57, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

how do you even art. wow. This is great! Maybe add a bit of a highlight to that hind paw? Its kinda grey and flat. <span style="">18:05, 11/28/2014

Re-ups Thanks!:) 18:20, November 28, 2014 (UTC) http://www.ezimba.com/work/141129C/ezimba12232578445300.png

could you define the brown if possible? 03:51, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 15:03, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Lily (Ki) ~ For Approval
K so yeah. Siamese. meep. <span style="">11:12 Sat Nov 29

Smooth out the collar lineart, and bring the collar tag down. The collar tag is hanging from the collar, not behind it. 11:17, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the back a bit? Burntclaw (talk) 11:19, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, and the changes are here! <span style="">11:35 Sat Nov 29

Beautiful picture! Though the face could use a little smoothing out a bit. Just to fade into the tan colour of the cute cat ;3 Could you define the back just a smudge too? NikiandCats (talk) 14:15, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 15:54, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly tint the shading? It appears as though you've used black, but I think that a darker brown would suit the cream more. If not, that's fine by me. 19:38, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Try to make the collar a bit more, like, round, like on Millie's kit <span style="">01:21, 11/30/2014

Reups, <span style="">17:07 Mon Dec 1

It's still rather flat on the neck. Burntclaw (talk) 00:33, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

For the shading on the cream parts, I recommend tinting it a dark red. <span style="">00:37, 12/2/2014

Goosefeather (Ki) - For Approval
how do i even do fur ruffles Brick   The Bite of '87  11:37, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the dapples, I can't tell they are there. Lovely job :) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:39, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and inbetween the legs. This is amazing, Brick~ =) 18:18, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, also defined the tail shading a bit. and incase changes aren't showing Brick   The Bite of '87  11:57, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail, and define the shading on the face. Niiiice B) <span style="">00:35, 12/2/2014

Brightflower (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried out Jayie's shading style which I love <3. I adore her cute lil' muzzle. The eyes are larger because in her description it states that she has "wide-set amber eyes" so I just wanted to add emphasis on that. Colour & design taken from the warrior & queen pixels. all the kittens    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:51, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Forgot the pale paws. ._.    — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   12:59, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I fixed the alignment for you^^ Also, define the stripes a bit, as they're more pronounced on her other images. And define the shading & shading depth. This is pretty =) 13:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the eyes are normal on the other images, and you //need// to match that, so make them normal size please. And define the shading. 13:53, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you Frosty for fixing the alignment! I've defined the stripes, shrunk the eyes, shading & shading depth. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:05, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <span style="">03:45, 11/30/2014

can you blur and maybe thicken the shading everywhere not on the head? 03:49, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? I kinda can't see them. This is really cute, though.

Re-uploaded - Thank you! All change have been added, although having some trouble with the stripes. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is making her looks pretty green in those areas. Try tinting it a dark red? <span style="">00:34, 12/2/2014

Clawface (Ki) ~ For Approval
Kit storm! =) I feel like I'm the only one who really liked Clawface..now I'm not sure if he had any scars that were confirmed when he had been a kit. I can go through YS again later, but you all could make it easier on me if you just say he had one over here or there. Now 1 thing I must be clear on: I cannot define the earpink. I'm matching other images and that's the color they were when I picked, and that's the color they are now. Thank you. Comment away~ 14:04, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Why would he have scars as a kit?? He doesn't have them as an apprentice, how would a kit get scars? Anything big enough for that would probably be mentioned XD Define the shading a tad? 14:08, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. XD well I've seen kits in real life that have scars because of cuts on things left around, and other cruel humans things..it's a sad thing when you see kits with scars. So I assume anything can happen, too, in the series lol. Especially when your name is Clawface. :3 14:32, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Mm. It's pretty sad indeed. Define the shading some more on the tail and legs? 15:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:15, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

You're gonna have to do something with that ear pink, Darkfrost. I can't see it at all, and it looks like he doesn't have any. Try picking from the lighter spots, and I'd go so far as to say you can even use the ear pink color from the alt warrior. I honestly can't even tell he's got ear pink. These blanks are terribly small and sometimes you have to tweak colors to get them to show up.

Re-uploaded. Before, I had picked from the rogue. This time, I picked from the warrior, which seemed to have lighter earpink. Let me know if you can see it or not. I know, these blanks are so freaking small it's hard to make anything appear, like shading and earpink. *.* 18:47, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink. It's ok if the earpink doesn't match completely in cases like this so we can //see// it, I would think. <span style="">00:48, 11/30/2014

Re-uploaded. Altered the color so you could see it. It's not too far off, only a shade or two. 13:04, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the face a bit? I know it's shaded, just don't know where the light falls. <span style="">00:32, 12/2/2014

Re-uploaded. Added a highlight on the face, too, to help clarify a bit. Also messed around with the facial shading. 13:45, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Splash (KP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
He does not get a collar since he was born a loner. And I think this is cute 18:57, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Define facial shading? He's adorable <3 <span style="">04:34, 11/30/2014

Reups defining face shading on the black fur is an absolute nightmare. And thank you! 11:49, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry to make you do this~Darken/define the shading more on the black only, because I can't see it on the black. He's so cute! ^.^ 14:58, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Reups if I define it anymore the lineart'll be invisible 19:05, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Rose (Ki) ~ For Approval
Weather reporter: There is a 99% chance of kits on the approval page! Anyways, I made a siamese kit. 20:02, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the collar by like one pixel? the collar would be pretty big on a kit <span style="">03:44, 11/30/2014

Re-uploaded Did I make the collar too big? Anyways, I also defined the collar tag shading and got rid of waste I saw. 18:48, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

do you think you could recede the brown on the legs a little? it makes it look like her chest has brown on it. 03:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Boom Did I recede it too much? 00:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

No, that's good. Maybe add another layer of shading on the right side of her at a lower opacity so we have some depth? <span style="">00:31, 12/2/2014

Blur/smudge the brown on the legs a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Kits 00:48, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
So beebs said the nonpregnant blanks can be considered approved. This counts as a redone queen, so I believe I'm allowed to keep this and Jake, am I not? flooof 00:03, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

reups i found what is either waste orrrr a smudge on my screen that looks like waste. 00:26, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading some more, and define the shading on the back leg farthest from us. I love this, and her tail XD 12:51, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Flooooooof 13:12, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading on her rump and tail?

but of course 21:04, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Perfect! There is nothing I would do to change this! Its brilliant <3 NikiandCats (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014

Plz sign ur posts with four "~"s, by the way, can you lighten up the shading just a teeeeeeeeennnyyy bit? Burntclaw (talk) 00:28, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, tbh. It looks brilliant like this. <span style="">00:30, 12/2/2014

Petal (Ro) (Q) - For Approval
I had so much fun with this pattern. ^^ Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:17, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading overall? Lol, I wanted her again. The Fox Girl (talk) 03:06, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Shading's fine tbh. <span style="">03:43, 11/30/2014

I'd have to say lighten the shading a tad on the > front leg and on the tail only because I can't see the pattern through it. Could be my eyes though, so if you think it's fine ignore me. This is gorgeous <3 12:48, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Try to match the placement of the stripes on the rogue and kit a bit better and lighten them and blur them. Also try to match the coloring of the shading and try to blur it in that same way. I'd really prefer that if I don't get to do this image they match exactly. >.> <span style="">13:48 Tue Dec 2 2014

Sorry, that was rude. You wouldn't have known I wanted it you weren't in the chat. But may I please have this image? I did the other two and I'd really like to finish the full set as I'm rather proud of her rogue and kit still. <span style="">14:00 Tue Dec 2 2014

Nobody take this the wrong way, I'd just like to say that Jayie shouldn't feel pressured into giving over the image. If Jayie wants to keep the image, you can just send her the file, Breezey, to make it match more precisely. 15:23, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Also, tbh, neither the kit nor the rogue are really showing the pattern on (their) right side, like this one is. The pattern doesn't have to be symmetrical, and besides, I think this matches beautifully. 15:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I didn't realize you wanted this image. But I've also wanted it for quite a while, and I think I can get it to match. I'd like to keep it, if that's alright. I'll reupload soon, I'm having laptop issues. I'm really sorry about the image, but I really enjoyed working on it. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:27, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Clovertail (Alt Q 2) ~ For Approval
i completely butchered this one im so sorry 00:55, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Just lighten up the chest shading a tick, it's a bit grey. And you did not butcher her you made her purrtty 01:32, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Shading's fine. There's enough white on her that you can tell the chest is actually white under the shading. <span style="">04:32, 11/30/2014

I agree with Sorrel, but not because I think it's gray. I think it's a bit too dark there.

The body shading seems to clash with the pelt color. Maybe lighten it a shade? 12:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 13:14, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back? <span style="">22:21 Mon Dec 1

re-up 00:04, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the facial shading just a tad..not too much though because it's far from the light and should be darker, but a little because like the body before, it is clashing a bit. She's beautiful Beebs~you've done a wonderful job. =) 13:51, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 23:41, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the hind paw we can see all of? <span style="">23:50, 12/2/2014

One-eye (Alt Q) - CBA
um so I tired a different light source. changes <span style="">01:15, 11/30/2014

Lighten the shading, please. I know the whole artist's choice thing is around, but it's a bit too dark and clashes with the base.

reups holy smokes i made it really dark oops. anyway that's better <span style="">21:40, 11/30/2014

CBA? 23:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Clovertail (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
yuck. 01:19, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial shading a bit? Nice job, Sorrel~ <span style="">04:33, 11/30/2014

Reups 11:15, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

define the belly shading. 03:47, December 1, 2014 (UTC) Darken the stomach? NikiandCats (talk) 22:17, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

The stomach shading is fine, but it probably could be defined. Also, are the stripes supposed to just look like they're cutting off on the tail and places of the like? ....or is that just my eyes playing tricks on me?

Define the shading on the front legs a tad? And just gonna confirm that Jayce's eyes are in fact not playing tricks on them. 22:32, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I know, I was gonna fix that tail. For some reason I decided to cut them off, I was tired and couldn't really be bothered. I'll fix that up on the next upload. And no, Niki, I think that the stomach shading's darkness is fine. I'll define it, however. 22:39, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 22:45, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt Q) - For Approval
Yooo redone blanks

Blur/smudge the shading on the back by the ear. Also, define the shading on the front legs, and maybe add some beneath the head? The head would probably cast shadow, but if I'm being silly, ignore me. 10:07, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This is icky so I'll probably redo it again.

Blur the shading a bit more? Especially on the forehead. Burntclaw (talk) 00:20, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I said I'd redo it so I have this now and I stole David's source. I like this one a biiiiit more- I'm just having tail shading issues.

Define the shading on the belly and front legs? <span style="">23:49, 12/2/2014

Daisy (Alt Q. 3) ~ For Approval
ay papi 04:50, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Should she have a scar on her muzzle? I'm not too sure though... — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded. yes she should. 23:42, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad on the back leg farthest from us. how do you shade? I must know what you use & do because I adore it. 14:51, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I personally think the shading is fine, but that's just me. <span style="">22:20 Mon Dec 1

all the shading is about the same opacity, so I will have to say it's ok here. smudging man, tons of smudging thats how 00:18, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the shading a little bit on the upper part of the leg closest to us? It's a bit too sharp compared to the rest of the shading <span style="">00:24, 12/2/2014

re-uploaded. I thought I already did but apparently not whoops 01:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Nightstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
yo I actually kinda like how this turned out 16:34, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs and face. 03:46, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Could you brighten up more. I cant really see.. NikiandCats (talk) 22:16, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

The base pelt matches his other images, so it's fine. Also define the neck shading- I can't see it.

Re-uploaded I just defined the shading altogether. 22:38, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, friend? <span style="">23:47, 12/2/2014

Ferncloud (Alt Q 2) ~ For Approval
The shading is icky, so may I please have a redline? 20:50, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 21:20, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the facial shading and tail shading a bit? <span style="">22:05, 11/30/2014

Re-Uploaded 23:20, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changed shading into smudged shading. =) 23:39, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Upped 23:44, November 30, 2014 (UTC)

Have the tail shading curve more with the shape of the tail. I like this a lot. =) 14:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the closest front and back legs, too, and add a few more flecks. Nicely done, Tiger, I don't think you need a redline for the shading ^_^  16:24, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

I forgot to ask you to blur/smudge the belly shading a little. <span style="">21:33, 12/1/2014

Would you like the file to her queen, Tiger? 22:48, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks. ^-^ 00:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I think this may need a bit more flecks on the right side of the face? Either that or define them, because I can kind of see them, but Im not sure. <span style="">00:11, 12/2/2014

Lighten up the shading on the left front paw. Burntclaw (talk) 00:26, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:51, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Make the shading curve with the tail. <span style="">23:46, 12/2/2014

Goldenflower (Alt Q.) ~ For Approval
I luv Goldenflower :3 16:05, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. 19:17, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Just as a heads-up, please don't align your images. =P I've fixed it for now, but keep that in mind for future images.

I recommend also tinting the shading a dark red. It might help a bit. Nicely done~ <span style="">22:24, 12/1/2014

Re-ups 19:46, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Ashheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tried Jayie's shading. All colors from the warrior image, which I'm the OA of. Comments? 21:57, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the chest? <span style="">22:22, 12/1/2014

Reuploaded. 22:33, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source and blur the shading a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:24, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the light source just fine, though I'll change it if others agree. As for the blurring, I'm using Jayie's shading, and she doesn't blur or smudge her shading. 00:53, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I still think the shading above the hind leg could be defined more <span style="">05:32, 12/2/2014

Reuploaded. Changes |here. I'll fix the waste next. 21:30, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Flowerstar (Ki) ~ For Approval
I don't even know where all these kits came from. Someone please tell me, literally. <span style="">22:19 Mon Dec 1

they came from their mums Define the light on the tail? <span style="">22:22, 12/1/2014

nah they came from hell define the head shading a tad?? 22:23, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, basically, in a nutshell... all cats who have a confirmed littermate or parent qualify for the kit ranking. Especially if they have a confirmed mother, since they gave birth to the cat, and we give queen rankings for that. tldr, I started a PC discussion and it actually went over really well for once and now we apparently have tons of kits because I vastly underestimated the amount of characters with siblings and parents in this series. Also can you define the light on --> back paw if there is any?

Re-uploaded. Okay, thank you muchly. Lol Beebly... the blanks came from hell, not the kits. The only kit from hell is Clear Sky. <span style="">22:30 Mon Dec 1

Could you define the light on the two front legs? I dunno, there are so many kits I'm started to agree with Beebs..Lol 14:07, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:36 Tue Dec 2

Palebird (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
23:38, December 1, 2014 (UTC)

Your picture is beautiful! Could you smooth out the shading a bit? Its a little.. Smudgy. If anyone else disagree's then you can leave it how it is <3  'SO KAWAII'NikiandCats (talk) 00:13, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Shading can be either smudged or blurred, so it's fine as-is. <span style="">0:15 Tue Dec 2

I actually agree with Niki, blur the shading a bit more. Burntclaw (talk) 00:22, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine. It's not blurred. It's smudged. <span style="">00:27, 12/2/2014

I actually don't think it's blurred or smudged lmao. He has odd ways of doing shading and it's never the same way twice. Could you lighten up the shading on the face just a bit?

re-uploaded. It is smudged so I'm not going to smooth it out, I'm trying to match the style I did on her normal queen. I also lightened it up a bit everywhere since it was a tad dark. 01:14, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded again, changed the leg black 03:15, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Ki) - For Approval
02:22, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

SHe's cuuuuuute. Define the shading a bit on the legs?

Smudge the colors together more to match the other images. Burntclaw (talk) 04:52, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

She's adorable, Ducky! =) Define the tail shading some more. 14:00, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think the shading could be defined overall. <span style="">23:44, 12/2/2014

Gorsestar (K) ~ For Approval
I couldn't get ahold of any of his files, but i tried :P. He probably doesn't match 110%,  but i colorpicked from his other images as best as i could. ^^'. As usual, smudged shading; so please don't ask me to blur it. His hair spikes are so adorable~  04:32, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the leg to our left and the tail. Also maybe add some shading in the esr to our left the face looks flat over there. Nicely done, Breeze. <span style="">05:34, 12/2/2014

Define your earpink a bit, too. Welcome to hell: where you must try to define an earpink that blends in perfectly with its pelt colors! XD I likey this =) 13:58, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

Sunstar (Ki) - For Approval
tiny child sunstar <span style="">23:39, 12/2/2014

He's adorable! Define the shading on the neck? I can't see it. Burntclaw (talk) 00:20, December 3, 2014 (UTC)