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Thrushtalon (W) ~ For Approval
I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-; 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me. 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups The shading looks wwwwaaaaayyyyyyyy better, /not  19:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the shading some 20:46, 03/25/2015

re-up 21:10, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the stripes on the haunch on under his neck/chest; he's starting to toe the line of triangle tabby. Also, blur and lighten the shading on the back 21:11, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could lower the shading's opacity as well, because I can't see the stripes at all through it. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up re-did him and made him a mackerel tabby. Dont know if it was the right choice... 02:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and blur it more. You can try secondary shading as well but it's just a suggestion. 02:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I should darken the shading more '-' 02:41, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading a bit? I <3 his stripes. 02:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also, can you smudge/blur the stripes a bit, too? 03:03, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the legs a tad 20:38 Sun Mar 29

re-up Did I answer everyone's questions? 01:53, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit more, it's still kind of hard edged. 13:27, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, honestly. Could you smudge the stripes a bit more? This is looking very nice!! 17:17, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna have to agree with Tiger, just blur/smudge the shading a bit more. 00:15, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on the legs. 04:39, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

still needs blurring, and the stripe by his ear is really hard edged. 11:46, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I think he looks a little better. Changed the eyes to green because I think he looks sexier that way. 21:17, April 3, 2015 (UTC) x2 I dont know why the stripes look so hard edge on the wiki '-' My GIMP Says it's perfectly stripe like.. 21:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading and the eye depth, please. 23:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Merp? 13:15, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yo the shading looks really nice! Now define the shading on his back right paw, and add a few more stripes to the head. 14:34, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

You could smudge the thicker darker stripes on the tail. Spottehwobble!

I think the stripes are fine. And Spotted, if you are doing big text, end it with please. 23:54, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

So do I have to do what Foxy suggests on the stripes or... Leave it how it is? Im a little confused 3x 15:39, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-up on the shading, dont know 'bout the stripes... 15:44, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Spiketail (D) ~ For Approval
Welp... first charart. Hopefully I don't chicken out or get arrogant and I didn't screw anything up /)-(\  ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:45, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the pupils/eye color? I can't see any at all, and he needs to have them. Also, darken his base just a bit, and blur the main body shading a tad.

blur the shading a lot, and make the light on the bent leg more visible 11:35 Wed Mar 25

There is waste under at the outside of his chest. Pretty goood for your first one! 19:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed eye colour, redid with a darker grey. Eye colour was originally supposed to be grey until my lesson learned: Never put grey eyes on a grey cat. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Realized I messed up on shading. I'll start work on it tomorrow when I wake up or after I get home from the hospital. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:41, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Add pupils, if you want to look at examples, you can look at some of mine. 04:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added pupils (who ever knew eyes could be so difficult? I need new glasses). Might as well do this before I sleep since it's fast. Thank you for the examples, Foxy :) -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

You're welcome! If you need help you can always ask me. :) Now, just darken and define the shading and define the eye depth. We're getting there and he looks awesome. 10:49, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Is it okay if I can get a recommendation on what to set the blur rate to? I use Gaussian Blur on gimp. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:29, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, it depends on the blanks. I used to make 25 my very maximum for any blank, before I started smudging instead. Try stuff out, see how it looks. Gaussian blur tends to make look flat or occasionally blotchy, though. Try using the blur tool on a high rate if you have trouble finding a good setting for guassian blur. 18:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere Russettail13 (talk) 02:09, March 28, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Could I get some assistance on trying to shade in GIMP? I know, it sounds stupid but somehow, GIMP just doesn't want me to shade correctly anymore. I tried using the smudge tool (though I suck at smudging), I tried using the blur tool, and I even tried using gaussian blur. For gaussian blur, the option was greyed out. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Try a hard edged blur tool and blur the edges only at a rate of 100, make sure the mode is RGB. It you would like I could make a tutorial for you. I suggest not using the smudge tool until you have more practice. However if you do decide to use it use a hard edged smudge tool at the rate of 60 depending on how much you want it smudged and smudge the shading towards the direction of fur. Sigh with ~ please. 03:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dang it! I forgot, thank you for reminding me. That's what I get for being sleepy. I'll try, but if it doesn't succeed, I'll redo the image. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded After getting SkyClan's Destiny, munching on some candy, and finding my glasses, I finally found out why it wouldn't shade. It wasn't on RGB. Sorry if there seems to be a lack of change. I set gaussian blur to 20 and made the eyes brighter. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:40, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit more.

Reuploaded I have an uneasy feeling that I blurred too much, since I'm not sure if I can really see the shading, but I could be wrong. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:28, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I might give this a thorough check again. I bumped down the blurring rate to about 27.5 ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:19, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bumped it down to 26. Still using Gaussian Blur because I'm lazy. -- ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:27, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bumped it down to 24. Didn't like it at 26. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:24, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading quite a bit. 10:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took shading down to about 23 or 22. I spy a bit of waste so I'll get at that immediately. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bye bye, waste. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:54, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

No, I meant make it more visible, not less visible. I can't see the shading right now. 23:42, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I had a hard day and can't think >< I can't even remember to stop aligning the image. I feel stupid.

Reuploaded Hopefully this bad day doesn't stretch on for me. Anyway, I blurred and adjusted a bit. At first I thought I didn't see the shading, but it was because of my glasses. I'm still pretty unsure though. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:11, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Its fine, everyone makes mistakes now and again. As for the image, define the foreleg shading. You did beautifully on this Skid. =) 01:41, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :D (I hope the changes are showing)

Darken the shading quite a bit. 04:34, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried not to darken too much because for me, a little goes a long way. one of my last uploads before chicago.

Darken or define the shading just a little more? 20:50, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded hopefully it shows the changes... Redid shading since I lost the other file.

Darken the shading more 06:29, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Since you clearly know what your doing, im changing the heading and promoting you to an apprentice. As for the image, define the overall shading- i can barely see it. 20:22, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't really think it needs defining, just darkening. 20:46 Fri Apr 3

Reuploaded Is this too much? I want to make sure I have just the right amount of shading.

define the shading on the legs 06:38, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

You could define the shading everywhere but the flanks. ~Spotted

Reuploaded I still am sort of fretting that this might be a bit too much of shading. In my next upload, I'll lighten some of the shading.

Dull down the ear pink 03:25, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lost my save so I'll have to redo the shading again. I got the earpink though. I have a headache so I wanted to get this done as soon as possible.

Sloefur (MC) ~ Withdrawn
My first medicine cat, and I love his name. ^.^ Comments? 19:09, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the texture more? Beautiful! And can you define the shading everywhere? Im having a hard time seeing it. 19:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks =) but if ya don't mind I'm gonna ask for a second opinion on the texture, just because I really like the way it turned out, but if someone else agrees I'll smudge it a bit more. I did define the shading, however. 20:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

just lower the opacity a bit more, the way you smudged it is fine 20:47, 03/25/2015

Sorry, but you're going to need to match this image, as we have confirmation that the cats listed in the allegiances of Firestar's Quest are the same cats in Mapleshade's Vengeance. This means removing the texture- I apologize.

Re-uploaded. Ah I see. And you're fine, who would've known other than the author herself? But I must say I'm a tad confused. Does that mean instead of^^ this Sloefur being male does he have to be a female? And also have long fur to match the other one? And have the same file name as the original since they're exactly the same cat? 22:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, everything needs to match- from the gender down to the pelt length. Sorry, that's just how we work- If Vicky says they're the same, then we don't have a choice. Gender can easily be changed later with the lineart, so that's no big deal. It just needs to match.

Re-uploaded. k he's now a she, and long-furred. 22:15, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit, please.

Define the earpink just a little? 10:48, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)Russet

i think the definition is fine, but i think it could be blurred a lot 20:42 Sun Mar 29

K I'll reupload tomorrow. Sorry, had a lot of work this week. 03:04, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Ugh editor isn't working, can someone help me? What should I do? I need to upload it again and it won't let me upload my cat. .-. 13:47, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

just upload to tinypic 13:49, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Mk. That ^^ isn't current, just so all know. 15:15, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shape of the earpink. 04:48, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bleh it's still not working. I may have some damn virus somewhere on this comp. I'll run something later. I loved Jayie's style of earpink so that's what I did to define the shape. =) 12:17, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think this should be the male blank bc he was listed as one 14:47, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yes but Vicky said this is the exact same Sloefur from Firestar's Quest so it has to be female. *shrug* 18:03, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading in the darker areas. (flanks and tail) ~Spotted

Wasn't she listed as a male though? I think this should be the male blank. 07:04, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure she's fine as a female. Since she's from Firestar's Quest, I think we're going with the gender she was listed as there, which was female, so... 12:25, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Mosskit's alt was a male blank bc he was listed as one, so I think this should be a male 14:22, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

except this isn't an alt, this is an actual rank, so I disagree. she was described as female first. 14:26, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink? 14:39, April 5, 2015 (UTC) thank you David & Icebreeze. And I'm going to guess you are not looking at the current version because the earpink is pretty in-your-face already. And I'm trying to get this upload-problem fixed..I dunno what the hell is wrong with..whatever it is, but I'm gonna figure it out soon. I can get to that shading a bit later though, unless someone says it's fine. :/ I dunno I've already been told to lighten it. 14:39, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing for reasons. *shrug* 12:51, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Midgepelt (W)~ For Approval
Sorry for not posting sooner I just got a new lap top and had to redo some stuffs. Anywho, here's Midgey. 11:49, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

he needs patches in his fur. 11:50, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the eyes...? All I see is the default area- did you forget to give him pupils and such?

Reups Oh my xD how could I miss the eyes if all things? 12:30, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There are still no pupils, also define the tail shading 13:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I reupped the wrong one lel. I added the defined shading though (this time I chose the right one xD) 14:08, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

where's yer light source? the haunch says one way, the chest says the other 21:40, 03/26/2015

Define the light on the legs, please, as well as the shading on the head. 22:46, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 17:27, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the neck shading a tad? 00:21, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

i can see it fine, to be honest 11:51 Mon Mar 30

Define the light on the tail and the back legs. 14:38, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:00, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 04:31, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 00:44, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Oh yeah I'll reup when I get to school sorry 10:25, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (W) ~ CBA
My first warrior. For the chest, I tried to go for a soft look (feather soft!) 02:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the feather softness was in reference to the fur's feel and not necessarily the color. Thicken the shading on the back and define it on the head, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. 02:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I know, I thought just the lighter chest is fitting, and tried to make it look soft. 02:55, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Unless he's said to have a lighter-colored chest, I think it should be removed. It's allowed on tabbies because they usually have them.

Blur the shadin more 10:46, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Make the base color a little less gingery? Russettail13 (talk) 16:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Reupload 23:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

He looks really orange, make him brown just a little more. 04:29, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Now he looks kinda green... 22:45 Sat Mar 28

Reupload goodness hope his not feeling sick XD. 23:00, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tone down the ear pink a little and define the light on the legs. 11:04, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

It still looks a bit greener than brown. 14:08, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks kinda blotchy, smooth it out a bit? 20:43 Sun Mar 29

Reupload I can't change his colour away from green anymore. His starting to look ginger again. 22:07, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

He actually looks like an old version of Oakheart's tawny alt... Might I suggest a shade around #A06F44? That's the color I used for Grasspelt. He's still looking a bit ginger on my screen.

Reupload thanks for that. 00:02, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

she shading is still a tad blotchy on the neck. smooth it out a little more? 11:45 Mon Mar 30

Reupload I just read the book again and his mentioned to have the same soft shade of brown as at least Petalkit, so I colour-picked off her image. Credit to Petalkit's OA. :) 21:56, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more 06:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I've redone the tail shading since it is leaking away from the lineart. I've also got the eyes to match Patchkit's eyes, since it is mentioned to have matched. Credit to the OA of Patchkit's image. 07:03, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink a bit more. He also looks a touch on the shiny side 22:25, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I think the shiny fits, he has glossy fur. 22:34, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. 04:30, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

The neck, head and tail shading are a little blotchy in places. 20:49, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Also, might I suggest shifting the brown's certain shade a little? It's looking a little dark cream, rather than pale brown. 20:52, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:50, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, blur the shading on the main body and make it curve a little bit more to the body. 09:04, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Where do you mean by body shading? Maybe show me a redline. 09:44, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=n38aj4&s=8 Mainly on the neck and the body. 10:37, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Is that better? 23:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yep! Now just define the light on all the legs and I think this is good to go 02:56, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:03, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 05:50, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on all the legs? sorry for interrupting your CBA 22:15 Sun Apr 5

Reupload 10:23, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 11:04, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Seedpelt (Alt W) ~ For Approval
idk 17:15 Sat Mar 28

Weren't she and the other Seedpelt said to be the same cat? And if so, shouldn't she match the other Seedpelt's description? 17:34, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

it would be an alt now, it should just be renamed and it'll be fine. 17:42, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-named. Also, brighten up the white a bit on the muzzle and tail.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I remember that alts had to match the normal images in terms of fur length, so, shouldn't this be short-furred, like the other image. 23:13, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/Smudge the white more and define the earpink. 23:55, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't Seedpelt match her new description? 03:54, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

this is an alt, not the warrior. 03:55, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading more, it's a bit hard edged. 14:11, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

practically redid it the reason it didn't match the normal image before is because i didn't see that they were the same cat. 18:10 Sun Mar 29

Can you blur the shading a bit more? 20:31, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

it looks fine to me, but if someone else agrees then i will its smudged not blurred <span style="">21:16 Sun Mar 29

I'm gonna agree with Tiger here. Please smudge it, if you don't blur it. 21:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs while your at it. 02:39, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more 04:37, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

reups i should probably smudge the neck shading anymore but eh i'll probably be told to do it anyway <span style="">11:38 Mon Mar 30

Define the tail shading and smudge the shading a lot on the haunch. Smudge the white towards the direction of fur. 14:34, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">01:21 Wed Apr 1

Define the ear pink just a little, and he looks a tad greenish. 04:29, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up that brown a lot. The description is light brown-and white. This even borders on a darker neutral brown.

Smooth out the shading on the main body, a bit. 20:48, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

reups seedpelt is a female btw <span style="">21:07 Wed Apr 1

Shouldn't you be using the male blank? The allegiances listed her as a male, not a female. 12:03, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

well i was told to match the female gender but i can change that if i have to. <span style="">03:43 Fri Apr 3

Well Mosskit's alt is a male cause she was called one. Seedpelt was also called a male along with her description. I think you should really tweak it into a male blank. 03:49, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, especially on the haunch. 09:02, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">11:50 Fri Apr 3

Define the ear pink 14:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">22:13 Sun Apr 5

Lakeheart (Q) ~ CBA
09:58, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

would you like the .xcf? anyways, point out the edges of the stripes more, smudge the tail stripes some more, and define the shading. 10:01, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The file would be really helpful Beebs =) my e-mail is thefoxgirl15@yahoo.com 10:16, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

<3 Can you define the shading a bit? 22:05, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. I can see it. 00:54, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think she should define it everywhere, except for the tail. <span style="">11:36 Thu Apr 2

Re-uploaded I defined it as far as I can 11:59, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see any shoulder or facial shading- define it, please. Given your source, there should be some.

Re-upped 13:11, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shifted the colors around using the xcf Bbun gave me 07:24, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the belly shading just a tiny bit more? <span style="">20:48 Fri Apr 3

Shading definition is fine, it could be smoothed out, in fact. but could you maybe make the stripes a bit neater and make them match more with the warrior 02:52, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I accidentally used Burnt's account again. I redid the stripes and fixed the shading, I hope it looks better this way. I do not want to define the belly shading or it will clash with the pale underbelly. 05:52, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

if thats shoulder shading it needs to be smudged or whatever. 13:05, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg furthest from us a smidge - so beautiful. 14:58, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks~ btw it was a stripe combined with the texture, not the shading 05:35, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed stuff I hated 06:47, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

I like this. CBA? 02:51, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Ambermoon (W) ~ For Approval
I'll redo the shading if it's really as crappy as I think it is. I'll probably also smudge the stripes a bit more if needed. 14:27, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sweet! Smooth out the shading a bit. Oh and maybe blur the stripes? 17:06, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'll smude the stripes instead, and I'll redo the painful shading. 01:38, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks fine, but you should smudge it in the direction of the fur. <span style="">11:37 Thu Apr 2

I agree with Sunstream, please smooth out the shading. 12:01, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle hole :3 20:06, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Ouch! Painful mistake now that I've been doing chararts so often and I still forget to remove the triangle XP I do have a problem though, I'm in Zhuhai so my computer doesn't have gimp. I'll download it and redo the entire thing. 03:18, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 05:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more 06:19, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Havenpelt (W) ~ CBA
Apparently a pelt can be a haven 20:46, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading Russettail13 (talk) 01:02, April 2, 2015 (UTC)Russet

I'd much rather not. The base is rather dark anyway, so defining the shading is no easy job. The shading is on multiply, almost pure black and if I increase the opacity much more, I'll get an annoying 'splotch' on the lighted areas. For some reason that happens when I shade black cats. 01:36, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the neck shading, unsmudge it a little bit, it looks way too smudged/blurred. Also, define the light on the tail. 03:22, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 11:05, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the white on the neck, it looks a little odd--for lack of better word--in comparison to the rest of the white. Gorgeous! 13:10, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups danke 15:54, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the main body and the tail. 11:01, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 17:57, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the body just a tiny bit? <span style="">20:49 Fri Apr 3

Reups 23:16, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

i know theres an apprentice image to match, but can you darken her some? she looks dark grey rather than black (and so does the apprentice tbqh) 06:42, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed with David- Black-and-white cats are sometimes a butt to shade because of this. Do you shade all of it with one layer? If you do, shading the black with one layer and the white with another is just as good, if not a bit easier to control how gray the white looks, and how dark/light the black looks.

Reups okay, I've darkened the black - but not too much, because otherwise I'll be told to define the shading, and yes, it's an utter nightmare when I get that weird splotchy mark on my black and white shading. 15:22, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? 00:37, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

How about a CBA? 00:40, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Alderpaw (App) ~ For Approval
I am incredibly proud of this. =3 01:27, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the light on the back leg. 09:18, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

the stripes seem to get lost in the shading, define them or something? 11:41, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 00:48, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on his right back paw and the shading depth 09:09, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading? lookin nice <span style="">20:50 Fri Apr 3

Thanks 23:04, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on our right back leg? So cute. 15:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad, his stripes are still getting lost in it. 00:01, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

^-^ I can't lighten it any more or it'll look a bit odd 21:58, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Spikefur (W) ~ CBA
All colors from the apprenice, which I'm the OA of. I can't remember, but I think that the shading opacity is the same as the apprentice as well. Comments? 12:41, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading- don't care if you blur it or smudge it. (not sure of your style tbh)

Reuploaded. Btw, I always blur my shading. 20:27, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink not cover the whole inside of the ear? Love that face 😃.

23:24, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! 23:49, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading and smooth it out on the main body 10:40, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

lighten up the shading a lot and define your light source <span style="">11:52 Fri Apr 3

I think it's fine on both accounts; I use this same shading before (on Lionblaze's warrior alt before it was tweaked). However, I'll change it if someone else agrees. 12:26, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Imo, the shading looks fine. 13:53, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with burnt clW, please smooth it out 14:08, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:01, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I forgot to get rid of the waste from when I blurred it. 20:03, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the neck shading? he's nice <span style="">20:50 Fri Apr 3

Add some more light to his legs maybe? 21:18, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Give the tail shading a blur 06:39, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 07:05, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 02:51, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Not happy with these stripes :/ 03:06, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading. 03:14, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know but she seems a little lighter than her other images? It could be the use of highlights though. Also, I think the stripes are thicker and less dense on her other images. 03:45, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

If you can see here- http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Lilyheart.warrior.png - she has some gold highlights on her face and sides. Can you add those in? 13:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups They were already in, under the darker stripes, so I can't add them. I used the warrior image for reference, sooo... sorry :/ And my images always seem to look lighter, it's just the highlights. 16:50, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

the belly looks pretty grey, lighten the shading up a tad? she's pretty <span style="">20:51 Fri Apr 3

reuploaded 23:13, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading 05:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading that is between the back and the belly gives the stomach a lumpy look. Could you remove it please? I'm so sorry you can totally ignore me if you want <span style="">23:21 Sun Apr 5

Foxpaw (A) - CBA
- Yes, he is a pointed tabby, so he's not getting anymore stripes 04:30, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink 06:26, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the stripes a little more? they're looking a tad hard-edged <span style="">20:52 Fri Apr 3

i thought pointed tabbies were only on mink point cats and such? the closest thing to that on a solid would be a ticked tabby. [just want to throw this one out there] 21:07, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:13, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

who cares honestly he's a tabby? thats all that matters? can you make him slightly more russet, I thought he was brown at first.

Re-uploaded 03:41, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Minor thing, could you define the shading on his right front paw? 00:43, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:10, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 02:53, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Grassheart (Q) ~ For Approval
Okay, I'm trying a tabby now This looks pretty bad. 12:27, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

You have to match this image. 12:47, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

This is great for your first tabby! Straighten some of the stripes, fix the ones on the head and it will be moving in the right direction. I love the fur behind the stripes...you don't want to see my first tabby... 13:47, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I tried to match her. I actually color-picked for the base color and earpink and tried to match the eye color. I think the issue is the stripes. I changed their color in an attempt to match the apprentice, and made them a little less smudged. I'm hesitant to change the head stripes, as they were done to match the apprentice, but thanks, Sunstream. I will re-up when I get the chance. 14:33, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

There is a layer of texture under the stripes, from what I can tell. For the stripes, I suggest them to flow with the curve of the body, especially the ones on her back, also, make them a tad denser to match the apprentice. 14:38, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Idk what you're talking about, there's no texture, but I did work on the stripes 16:38, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a tiny bit? They give it a furry like affect. You use GIMP, right? 16:54, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Yes, I use GIMP. And I smudge my stripes, so I smudged them some more instead. And I really don't want to blur or smudge them any more, as they aren't particularly blurred/smudged on Grassheart's apprentice. 18:25, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

What Burnt meant was there is supposed to be a layer of texture underneath the stripes on this image, since there appears to be one on the apprentice image. 18:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Oh, that makes perfect sense! I feel so stupid that I didn't realize what Burntclaw meant. I have now added a layer of texture. 20:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the texture? and maybe blur the tail shading a bit <span style="">21:12 Fri Apr 3

Re-upped 00:15, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the neck? 00:26, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I hope I got the right spot. 00:46, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

The texture is sharper on her apprentice image. Try using an airbrush on a darker color and run it over the image until it looks like texture. If you don't want to do that use a 1px pencil and run lines over your image, then use a 1px or 2px hard edged smudge tool and smudge them towards the direction of fur. 02:40, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! I tried using the airbrush method, so hopefully you can see the texture better. 14:42, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Ice, this is beautiful :) define the shading on the tail 06:27, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out shading on the stomach. 07:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! =) 14:00, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the stripes nearing the top of the tail curve a bit more with the shape? It looks a bit to straight considering the lineart is bending at that certain spot. If you dont know where im talking about, i can try to provide you with a screenshot? 08:55, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Birchface (Star) - CBA
happy screeching.

lel could you define the shading everywhere just a tad plz 12:06, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

define the shading on the pale bit of his chest. (if theres any im so sleep deprived rn) 19:41, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

define the shading everywhere? i cant see where any of it is <span style="">11:38 Mon Apr 6

Well, it's kinda hard to see the shading with these images because of how dark it is- and I'm not going to lighten him up since that would mean I'd need to tweak his warrior and kit. He's described as almost black, making this a tricky color to get right that doesn't look green. The shading's just as defined on this image as it is on his other two.

I don't know what you're talking about gia I can see it very clearly 11:52, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, i agree with Jayce and Foxy here. I cant see anything else wrong, so lets try a CBA for this gorgeous kitty.

Larkkit (K) ~ For Approval
Decided to do it. How do you? c: If something is wrong - write. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

P.s – Somehow, all the time want to call Larkwing.

Ok, a few things. First, please sign your posts with ~ so we know who you are. Also, don't align your images. I fixed the alignment for you, but for future reference, don't add the |left after the image. Also, the file should be named Larkkit.kit.png, so can someone fix that? As for the image, it's pretty good but define the shading and dull down the earpink. Also, I'm pretty sure he should have a black nose, as he's a black cat. 16:17, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Sorry, but I didn't understand (translator) about the signature and the left side. May you explain slightly in a different way? But I nevertheless understood some and corrected. So?

I'm really bad at explaining but I'll try. For the signature: add ~ after what you write to sign. For the image: your code should read instead of. And on the image, please dull the earpink a bit more. 17:23, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Next day I will make more dark earpink. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink after you dull it please? 17:39, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I updated. It is already possible to lay out? Сияние Кометы 12:46, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading just a little? I like this. 13:37, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – What does "Define the shading just a little" mean? Sorry, but I didn't understand. ShineStar 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's making the shading more visible, which I think you could still do 14:18, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – And how so to make? ShineStar 15:12, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Shading black cats is hard. What art program do you use? 16:17, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I use the GIMP program. ShineStar 16:22, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, tail, and the right side og the body. <span style="">11:39 Mon Apr 6

Re-uploaded – It has to be so shaded? ShineStar 15:32, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Yarrowpaw (A) ~ For Approval
beep boop 17:07, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He looks brown, not ginger, so can you adjust the base color? Nice image, though! =) 17:14, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! I think the stripes are still good but I can change them if need be  17:21, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He honestly still looks really brown, could you make him more ginger? 17:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Imo he looks ginger, it's just the shading. Can you lighten up the shading a bit? 17:36, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If I adjust the base more, he'll look too yellow-greenish, so I played around with the shading color a little + lightened it. 17:36, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks pretty yellow. Make the base more orange, and then use a warm color for shading to keep it looking rad. 18:00, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face? I think this is very nice, Well done. 06:24, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

He looks golden not ginger... Russettail13 (talk) 13:33, April 5, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Leafkit (TAQ) (Ki) ~ CBA
she's ssssssssmokin'. (easter egg to who guesses the ref) 18:57, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, if there is any. she looks like a mini Dewy Leaf c: 19:55, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. reincarnation confirmed 05:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

yeah can i have some comments guys 02:17, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 02:49, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Evaluation
Here's Dewy! All colorpicked from Dewpaw Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 23:16, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. 23:47, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

There are a lot of uncolored spots; fill them in, please. Also, define the shading and earpink. 00:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

In addition, there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. 00:03, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you're using the right sized blank. Did you grab it from the PCA main page? 04:36, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

If you need the right blank size, you could find it :)

There is a greenish spot on his haunch or something, you're going to have to do something about it. 13:32, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

@Scarletwind I used the male long-furred warrior blank. @Icebreeze and Foxy I'll fix it. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 13:43, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

What Scar means is that you've used the wrong sized blank. Go to the link Skid posted, right click on that image, save it, and use that to redo the image. 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

There's also waste in the part between the third and fourth chest tufts. 14:53, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fix the lighting on him. What program do you use? Also, isint he suppost to have a white belly/chest? 15:19, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I use PAINT.NET for all my images. Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 17:31, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Are you using layers? Everything seems to be blurred together. 08:18, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Well, in the new image I am creating (because of the wrong-sized blank), my layers in order from bottom to top are: Background Color, White-Gray Patches, Lineart + Eyes, Shading, and Earpink.

Ah, I think you should put the shading and earpink before the lineart. :) 21:50, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Stonetooth (TAQ) (W) ~ For Approval
My first white cat.

Define the shading on the tail a tad 07:21, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~

Ravenwing (Star) ~ Withdrawn
Ravenwingeh 16:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the body a bit? I like this 07:22, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 07:34, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing 08:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Perchpaw (MV) (A) ~ For Approval
Been a while. <span style="">0:02 Mon Apr 6

He looks speckled... Could you smudge the texture a bit more or something 00:41, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg furthest away from us. This is better than my verison ;.; 07:37, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

define the earpink? cutie <span style="">11:59 Mon Apr 6

Re-uploaded. Aw thanks. c: <span style="">16:37 Mon Apr 6

Milkweed (Q) - For Approval
Gah, I cannot get that shading to work. Any suggestions? The tabby bits are find, it's the black splotches that I can't seem to shade properly. Also, she was described as a splotched black-and-ginger tabby from what I heard, so I decided to make her a ginger tabby with black splotches, because that's what some tortoiseshell cats look like. It seemed to fit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we find the cite first? Anyways, try to smudge the patches more. 02:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

page is up, she needs a torn eartip, black muzzle, and a scar on her muzzle. 08:42, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Patchkit (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
Poor kit ;___; 02:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Hollytuft (W) - For Approval
I forgot how hard black cats are to shade. 10:41, April 7, 2015 (UTC)