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Tuna (Ro) - For Approval
Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading 21:36, 9/07/2017

Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading

Renamed.

Define the shading a bit on the front leg furthest from us, and the light on the front leg closest to us. 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

think you can make the shading by the hind leg curve a bit? it looks add cutting right across the thigh. 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Try and curve the haunch shading more - still looks the same in cutting across the haunch. I also think that the light needs to be defined on the the < side of the cat, and definitely expanded on the face.

Define the ear pink. Good job. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:24, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on all legs/paws, and on the tail

could you expand the shading on the back and flank? 12:11 Mon Sep 11

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

He needs to be a tabby (unless my cite is wrong, then ignore this)

I have the ebook version of Tigerheart's Shadow, so I can't check. But if somebody who does have the solid version can verify it, I'll add it. I'm assuming you have it, as you added the site? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:10, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

I checked it. He is confirmed as a tabby. 21:27, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ahhh I lurve him with stripes --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:43, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws again

Define the shading depth on the tail and hindleg closest to us, just a tad. 20:55, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

think you can connect some of the tabby stripes to each other and the legs and back and tail? they look a bit more like mottled markings to me as they are. 22:42, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I changed the stripe pattern and shading, though I think now I maybe should have tried to change the previous one. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe connect them on the back like how a ticked tabby would be. They still look like they're all over the place. Maybe add a dorsal stripe and add more stripes to the face, legs, and tail? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 20:16, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the light on the front paws a little more, and maybe smooth the stripes a tad? 0:40 Thu Sep 14

Define the earpink^

Reups How do you facial markings? --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:32, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

there's waste around the ears

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:50, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

It's still there, it's like a triangular patch between the ears

There's also some above the nose

Reups

Define the shading on the ears^

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 23:15, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly taper the stripes, especially on the face? They look paintbrush-y, and people have been told to adjust that before. 01:16 Wed Sep 20

Still see waste around the ears. I can redline if you'd like.

\Reups' The waste snuk back in there in the last reups. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:23, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

could you brighten the earpink? it looks a little too grayish. 23:56 Thu Sep 21

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:16, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

I can't really see the earpink. 04:56, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

Could you taper the facial stripes more, or possibly make them thinner? It looks a little too thick right now. 15:13, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 17:30, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

https://imgur.com/a/MEbHZ The red circled area is shading that needs to be smoothed out. The blue pixels need to be black. The green pixel is waste. 13:15, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 15:59, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink slightly, and I think some of the tail stripes are leaking away from the lineart on the bottom side

The shading along the side of hte hip seems thicker at the top than the bottom, which doesn't seem right if it should be lighter on the top. Maybe thin out the shading there along the top? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:22, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (Lo) - For Approval
01:59, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

can u define the gut shading some 00:06, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:28, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly define it a ittle more and maybe make the neck and chest stripes more visible? Good job! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:44, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:16, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

The shading on the top of the neck is a little dark.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:30, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 13:01, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit too staight alon the edge of the shoulder - maybe make that follow the curve of the shoulder more? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:23, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:44, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Husker (KP) ~ For Approval
All colors from loner. Comments? 17:16, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the pale belly slightly?

Reuploaded. 20:39, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any way you could add some shading to the head fluff? It just seems very flat compared to the rest of the image imo 00:31, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:55, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the darker tail tip?

Reuploaded. 01:08, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart a bit on the hip. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:24, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:36, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Little Mew (K) ~ For Approval
lookin like a hotty// probably change the shading colour to black hmm 21:33, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

This looks great! Define the shading a smidge

re-up ill define it better on the legs 21:47, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

re-up 21:50, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Isn't Little Mew supposed to match her father? The brown on the main body here seems darker than Husker's images. 00:29, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Little Mew, Pad, and Husker are all the exact same coloring. The colors do need to match.

I can give you the file for Husker's loner image, if you'd like. Also, I don't believe that this can have texture. If manga alts aren't allowed to have texture, I don't see why these should be any different. 07:04, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Shanty (Ki) - For Approval
Wow how did I never post this. Everything from her kittypet. 01:12 Wed Sep 20

So adorable. Poor Shanty.... can you make the stripes on the back right leg a bit more visible?

So beautiful, so Shanty. Smooth out the shading a smidge. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:43, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out/blur the shading a bit on the right front leg. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:26, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:27, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

Diesel (KP) ~ For Approval
<span style="">02:44, 9/20/2017

The markings are great. Can you define the shading on the right ear? It looks a bit more faded then on the left one.

re-uploaded. <span style="">03:09, 9/20/2017

Define the ear pink. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:42, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. this is lousy. <span style="">05:10, 9/20/2017

I think there's something leaking near the ---> ear tip. 13:33, September 22, 2017 (UTC)

i double checked, there isn't. <span style="">04:16, 9/23/2017

Would a redline help? I should've done that first. Unless that is just sharp shading. 21:49, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:27, September 25, 2017 (UTC)

completely forget about this. its just shading <span style="">01:00, 9/25/2017

Diesel (Lo) ~ For Approval
Geez this was hard. Also will upload later to tweak shading.

On the kp (i know it's not approved yet, but it was the first one uploaded) the stripes on the body and tail are pointed the other direction.

i think the stomach shading is leaking near the front leg <span style="">05:06, 9/20/2017

If the kittypet was uploaded first, shouldn't this be short furred as well? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 05:35, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Star had no way of knowing that Broken would have her image be short furred. Give her a bit of time to fix things up to match, it hasn't been long since she uploaded. I'm not trying to be mean in any way, just trying to explain why it's going down like this.

Broken's is posted first, therefore she holds the master pattern claim here. All Star would really need to do is change the pelt length anyways. Everything else looks pretty good to me, in terms of matching. He is in fact shown with the shorter fur (compared to Graystripe, who has long fur), hence why I added it to his description.

the haunch stripes don't really match. i know its a different angle, but i think its missing a stripe or two. see here http://vvcap.com/oRLXOjslnEm <span style="">03:12, 9/21/2017

I think the top stripe on the --> front leg should be a bit smaller. And sharpen both stripes on the front leg. 13:11, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Sorry for the wait! I got swamped in schoolwork and stuff.

the thicker stripe on the ---> front leg needs to stretch up the arm further. <span style="">06:15, 9/22/2017

re-up

Pad (ki) (lo)~ for approval
cutie pad :3

-nightleaf32

Smooth out the shading. Also, define ear pink. Good start. 16:35, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

This is the first time Ive done any of this :/  - nightleaf32

He needs to have long fur like his alternate image. Also, you need to match Husker's image in terms of color, as they are shown to be the exact same color. 17:58, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

there's some waste above the head <span style="">20:06, 9/20/2017

RE-UP how about now? - nightleaf32

There is waste all around your image. Also, maybe check out the Apprentice Turtorials, I find those helpful. It is linked on the Charart page. 20:18, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Expand and smooth out the shading on the image. This also needs to be named as File:Pad.kit.png. 20:24, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light source

RE-UP

Remember to put your signature when reuploading, nightleaf. This is a good start so far. There is waste between the tail and the body and below the tail and <- paw. Also, could you expand the shading a little bit and define the shading depth? Once those are fine, I'll start nitpicking about the markings. Remember, Apprentice Tutorials are your best friend here. 01:05, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

RE-UP --Nightleaf32 (talk) 13:53, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is not that visible still. Also, the shading could use some work.

Re-up --Nightleaf32 (talk) 19:05, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. Also, I think that you've drawn over the lineart on the image (if you're using layers, make sure you have all of your layers of color under that of the lineart). Finally, make sure you're uploading over this, because you're still using another file name. 20:27, September 21, 2017 (UTC)

Fog (Ki) ~ For Approval
20:52, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

Cutie! Define the shading? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:25, September 23, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded this grey is annoying to shade 16:29, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Tuna (Ki) ~ For Approval
Another one to my kit army. 14:09, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

''Dies of cuteness proximity. ''Very nice job! Could you please define the tail shading? ErmineGlow (talk) 16:00, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink^

Reuploaded Thanks! I just moved the earpink above the shading layers. 18:10, September 24, 2017 (UTC)