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Cave Guard Blank ~ For Approval
I actually really love these (Vec i loved yours too) Malina457 (talk) 19:28, October 24, 2018 (UTC)Malina

I really love these, could you maybe make the face bit more round? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 19:30, October 24, 2018 (UTC)

I think Mink’s critique should just apply to the short haired blank actually! The long hair’s face is super cute!!

I think both should be rounded a tad bit more actually. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 20:47, October 24, 2018 (UTC)

I'm with Hawkey for the most part - but the long hair's muzzle should be a bit more rounded as well. The cheeks are fine. Also, I'm unsure of how the sizing should be, but these chararts look a bit large compared to others? I'm not too sure though since I'm not privy to sizing. 22:53, October 24, 2018 (UTC)

So make the muzzle more round on both? As for size, they're smaller than my last ones Malina457 (talk) 00:22, October 25, 2018 (UTC)Malina

reups Malina457 (talk) 00:29, October 25, 2018 (UTC)Malina

can you center the head? or is it ment to be off center? ~RAR =^.,.^= Im spoopy kittan! 00:36, October 25, 2018 (UTC)

Meant to be that way Malina457 (talk) 02:21, October 25, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The sizes of the blanks are fine and don't need to be changed, just as a head's up. Other blanks are around this size (guardian cats come to mind), so they're perfectly acceptable. ​

Could you maybe thin the muddle of the short hairs tail? It looks as though it really thick there just a bit pass the base almost like a knot. I can redline it if needed. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 07:45, October 25, 2018 (UTC)

reups Oh that was difficut Malina457 (talk) 11:28, October 25, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Shrink that big toe on the shorthair.Heyoitpotater (talk) 00:16, October 26, 2018 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 00:29, October 26, 2018 (UTC)malina

Can you add some fluff to the long-haired blank's back? 23:03, October 26, 2018 (UTC)

As well as to the bottom of the tail a bit. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:06, October 26, 2018 (UTC)

reups' i dont think i want to add back fur Malina457 (talk) 01:05, October 27, 2018 (UTC)

I agree actually, the hunter blank doesn't have it either so I think it's fine. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:08, October 27, 2018 (UTC)

Can you connect the longhair's fur on the shoulder to the shoulder. It looks out of place being abruptly cut off. Also, smooth out the fur lines on the longhaired. 04:08, October 27, 2018 (UTC)

I actually don't know what you mean by smooth out, since i think they have flow? (going to reup later)    Malina457 (talk) 04:46, October 27, 2018 (UTC)malina

Here's what I mean. It might be up to preference but the spikes should flow together in my opinion. 08:47, October 27, 2018 (UTC)

Agreed with Echo here. Smooth the flow so the lines look less blurry on both. Also, there is a toe on the shorthair (farthest left) that needs to be rounded a tad more. Other than that, good job!Heyoitpotater (talk) 13:37, October 27, 2018 (UTC)

reups Elected to keep the long hairs face fluff the same, as for the shorthairs toe, i wasnt quite sure which one you meant so i tried Malina457 (talk) 14:09, October 27, 2018 (UTC)Malina

There are two toes on the longhair that are too small.Lovely work Malina.Heyoitpotater (talk) 17:34, October 28, 2018 (UTC)

Can you thin out the longhair fluff lineart a lil bit? 00:24, October 29, 2018 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 01:53, October 29, 2018 (UTC)Malina