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Violet Dawn (ES) ~ CBA
God Berry's blanks are so beautiful ;; 11:57, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

theres a random streak of grey in the black of her hind paw, and could you maybe remove a tiny bit of the shadow on the front paw closest to us so the black is a bit more visible? 13:06, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

She doesnt have just black paws, she has blsck tipped paws so its fine the way it is. As for the shadow on the front paw, ill get to that when i get home 19:19, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

dude i know >.> all im saying is theres a random hard edged grey line that looks really out of place. christ. 20:02, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups 02:12, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There are random of light gray on her cheek. Add more shadow there? --Dewsplash (talk) 02:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:14, October, 21, 2015

Thats her cheekbone. Its fine 02:25, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Well, could you smooth it out a bit? It seems a bit too...abrupt, for lack of a better word. Also, lighten the shading on the belly a little bit and --> side of her.

reups 23:16, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

whoops reup 23:17, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the front legs? 01:34, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Well tbh this matches burnts shading style on quiet rain so idk... also friendly reminder i have no computer access until the 27th 04:32, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

just because it works on one image doesnt mean itll work on all of them. 05:55, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Wait I'm confused does she have to change it? 00:37, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Probably, yeah. I noticed a few more things i have to change a bit as well. I'll be home tomorrow at 8 or 9 pm est 00:41, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

and at the crack of dawn 11:57, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 21:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (ES) - CBA
I love Gray Wing I love Gray Wing I love Gray Wing. But I literally killed him with this. Thank you to Burnt for reserving this!!! Did I mention that I loved Gray Wing 16:04, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and possibly smudge the earpink more?

Re-uploaded: What even is this 21:23, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

could you darken the shading a little? 02:29 Wed Oct 21

reuploaded 11:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the far back leg? 15:20, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 20:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the shading 06:26, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you erase some of the shading on the tail? Beautiful~ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:30, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:48, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe it's my tired eyes, but I think there's some pesky shading waste hanging around the whole outline of the lineart. 21:14, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

it's there, i see it. blur the haunch shading a little more. 03:09 Fri Oct 23

Re-uploaded: Not sure if the changes are showing... 05:59, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the tail shading a bit.

re-uploaded: 21:10, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Gay Wing is sexy~ CBA? 02:28, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry >< but the shading is over blurred on the haunch and is leaking there as well, could you fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 09:20, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

the light on the front legs should be reversed to match the rest of the light source. 10:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I might just be going insane, but there seems to be a large amount of waste leaking from the right side of his head all the way down to his chest. -- 12:44, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: There's no waste... 17:09, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

ew it's buffalo wild wing. So on the edge of the haunch & then where the haunch meets the stomach-area the shading is lighter so could you define it there? 19:11, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded: 19:22, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

the belly shading leaks a bit when it meets the front leg. 19:06 Sun Oct 25

Re-uploaded: 23:13, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 00:42, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

difine eye depth Belllastar (talk) 01:08, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: The eye depth is as defined as it can be... 01:15, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Im honestly really really confused on your light source. Overall it appears its coming from the top left, but the back leg farthest from us had the light opposite, and the front legs are wonky as well. Could you try and fix that? 01:20, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: <_< 01:30, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Its still off a bit. Could you switch the shading on every leg to the opposite side? 11:36, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 15:51, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Do you think you could lighten the shading at the top of the back leg closest to us? It just looks a little dark 20:52, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 21:07, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Add another nick on the same ear.  ~ Silver Cloud ~  01:12, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: It looks sharp because it's supposed to be that way. Don't comment on it. 01:20, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Supposed to be dark. 03:45, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

I feel like you should lighten him a tiny bit - I know he's supposed to be dark, but he looks black. Sagestream (talk) 16:31, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Thats the whole purpose of dark gray. It looks blavk but its not 18:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (ES) ~ CBA
brb crying -- 16:09, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

smooth out/blur/whatever the stripes on her back. so beautiful. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 17:53, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on her head/face (if there is any). this is gorgeous! 20:05, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Did you get the file from me or TFG? If not, it's a good idea too - some of the areas are pale parts, rather than white. 20:46, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed areas of complaint (I hope, anyway). No, I did not get the file from anyone, but I mainly looked at Foxy's Loner and Queen, due to the similar poses. Looking at the legs, face, and tail on the Queen and Kit, they do seem to be a pale yellow. Would you like me to change that? -- 20:58, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

For your reference, the white + pale is at 100% on screen, with color #f9e7c3 for the pale. 21:11, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Oh no I wanted her DX oh well, would you like the file? 23:08, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed white parts to a cream color as needed, and also fiddled some with the shading. Thank you, Beebs!

I think I'm good now, Foxy, and I'm sorry I accidentally stole this from you. :( Thank you for the offer, though! -- 16:38, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

I wanted this too =P but you did a better job than I can ever. CBA?

Sorry, but the stripes could be thinned out, and the dorsal stripe could be thickened. I also think the stripes look slightly darker on her other images. 01:32, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the eye depth too? It looks a little flat ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:53, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

The dorsal stripe looks fine to me. 14:41, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined the eyes and thinned/darkened the stripes. -- 15:00, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

The white on the chest and paws look... Not white? could you brighten them up? 13:10, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could the edges of the tail stripes possibily be softened or smudged a tiny bit? They look a little sharp compared to her other images. I can see why she caught Clear Sky's eye - she's beautiful. 14:51, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -- 19:53, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could just be me but the puples look like they exploded, and we dident do star-shaped puples on any other of her images Belllastar (talk) 01:07, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Um she has star shaped pupils in her description its fine 11:37, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 17:05, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Acorn Fur (ES) ~ For Approval
Colors from the kit. 20:50, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading 01:51, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Is that too light? 02:02, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light on all the legs a bit? 19:27, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 20:24, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you sharpen the facial shading? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:54, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups How's that? 13:26, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on her left front leg and curve the neck shading to go with the neck more. 10:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups completly redid shading, as I wasn't liking it. 13:07, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading near the tail/booty & the shoulder? 19:07, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups  04:06, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 13:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

the shading on the neck and legs still needs defining. 17:33, October 25, 2015 (UTC)\

Re-ups  20:39, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the textuer a little more. Belllastar (talk) 01:03, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Its fine 11:38, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think it should be more defined too. This is super lovely though! I love Acorn Fur! <3

Re-ups Thanks! How's that? 18:44, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source more, the position of your shading doesn't make sense in some places. 18:12, October 27, 2015 (UTC) (Oops..)

Re-ups You forgot your signature. Light is coming from --> 17:53, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (ES) ~ For Approval
23:54, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups just realized I forgot to smudge a few markings 23:55, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the markings some more please 00:04, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the ear pink a tad? oh dang I want this but this is so beautiful 01:50, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reups Thanks Fox 09:58, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

There should be thinner and a greater amount of stripes. I also think her patches are paler than this. 10:11, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

theyre not paler, theyre duller. 11:43, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

'reups I use highlights, that;'s why the color's brighter. I dulled them down a bit though. 15:35, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Can you shrink the amount of white from her belly. It doesnt go that far down on her other images 02:53, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 10:23, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the white paws? 13:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Indeed I can 17:50, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

This is hot. Blur the haunch shading a lil bit? 19:04, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups I really should label my layers, I keep smudging the black instead of the shading >_> 20:45, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the facial shading just a little? 08:55, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reups 22:58, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you dull the paches a little more Belllastar (talk) 01:00, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'd rather not, unless I absolutely have to. The only way to do that is turn off the highlights completely, which is the only thing making it look brighter. 08:57, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Well, do you need the highlights? It is kind of throwing the color off, but if the image doesn't look like what you wanted it to look without the highlights, then I don't suggest you to remove them. 09:23, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't need them, no, but I've used them on literally every other image I've made (not counting tweaks) and haven't had to turn them off, even though some of them are much brighter than this. Plus, at least on my screen, |the color looks almost exactly the same as the ancient tribe image, which is the on I picked the color from. Plus, turning them off makes a pretty minimal difference :/

Sorry for being stubborn. 18:07, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I can barely see a difference at all, honestly. I think the colors are fine as they are. o.o

If anything, you should match the MC in terms of color, not the ancient, as I'm pretty sure the MC was first. 04:18, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

But it does match? If anything, it might be the shading or highlighted areas that make it look like it doesn't match.

Get rid of the white 20:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Also waste between the front legs 18:24, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Rainswept Flower (ES) - CBA
yay pretty cat with the pretty name 01:20 Wed Oct 21

That name suits you, Splook ;) Can you define light on the tail (I know it's shorthaired) and I think her stripes can be more smudged (just a little bit) and maybe just slightly thicker?

also make the lighter brown brighter, its a bit dull compared to the other images. 11:44, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded why thank ya brambley ;) 23:50 Thu Oct 22

Comments before approval? 14:39, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the stripes are less blurred on her other images. These seem a bit too...soft, for lack of a better word. Try sharpening them a little bit?

But she was just told to smudge them? 01:14, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. yeah i was 01:23 Sat Oct 24

Re-CBA? 13:13, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I don't want to break the CBA but I have a question. Is there texture or is it just the shading? Also did you want any hex codes for colors? Sorry I really should have asked earlier. 21:28 Sat Oct 24

It's the shading. Comments before approval again? 22:49, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

There's a weird patch of u smudged or blurred dark brown pixel patch on her right back leg. Could you blur/sMadge it? 14:24, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

if the shading makes it look like it has texture, itll need to be changed. 17:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. it was texture and it's gone now. 19:03 Sun Oct 25

Comments before approval? 20:54, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the lighter color on the belly (the shading masks it) Belllastar (talk) 00:58, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

i really don't have the shading there dark enough to mask the color. can i get a second opinion on this? 21:16 Mon Oct 26

I think it's fine. Re-cba? 01:21, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I really cannot see the lighter part of the belly. Lighten the shading around there. 01:56, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. 02:47 Tue Oct 27

Comments before approval? 16:16, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

One Eye (ES) - CBA
Oh god, why did I make his pattern so ungodly hard, and why didn't I have separate layers for everything the first time? O.O I tried. I'll probably tweak the shading and bald patches on the next update. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:25, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge/whatever your prefrence the  little mark thingies above his head eyebrows a tad. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:33, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the bald patches blend in with the fur more? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:28, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think his bald patches need to blend in with the fur. 19:20, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

its not that they need to blend in, right now they look sorta like globs of....pink paint? sorry if it sounds offensive. 19:24, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Not at all, I totally see what you mean. ^^ I'll work on them. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:00, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah that's sort of what I meant. Sorry for the confusion ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:40, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried to make the patches blend a bit better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:59, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading? 13:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Try a more saturated color to shade the bald patches or perhaps lighten the shading on them, they still look kind of like paint. 14:35, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Put some fur markings in front of the bald patches - does that help? Also darkened the shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:41, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 16:15, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (ES) ~ For Approval
Colours from the ancient. Now, I used a little highlights, just along the back and tail and a little around the left ear and face. I can remove it if she doesn't look black-furred, but I prefer to keep it. 22:22, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading somemore Gorgeouuss 22:28, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder/chest shading a tad. Lovely! 22:48 Thu Oct 22

Reupload Thanks! :) 23:11, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

The pupil size doesnt quite match in ==> that eye and its kinda bothering me. Thicken it by one pixel on > that side of it? 23:34, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Completely forgot to mention the design of the eye is based of Dapplepelt's image so credits to Shinxy for that. 00:10, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

theres lika a brighter streak on her back and tail. 09:48, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

realised its supposed to be highlights but they should be expanded so it doesnt look like a random streak. 10:53, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Her nose should be black; I think you forgot to fill it in. She looks really cute! 14:48, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks! The nose is filled in and is the exact same colour as the ancient. It's a sort of black-pink colour. 21:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a tad more? 13:33, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:19, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Color pick from the StarClan, please. The ancient image isn't the first in the set; when I tweaked these images, I think I posted the StarClan first, and the ancient image was posted afterwards... She looks a bit lighter than she should be, which I presume is because of the highlights. Also, smooth out the chest and <-- front leg shading.

Reupload 20:47, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Raven Pelt (ES) - For Approval
Sorry if his fur is a bit too light, I tried doing it darker and it just didn't look good to me. He has the same name as me I have an excuse. 21:59, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe use differnt highlights/tint then to make it look not so green? And perhaps darken it after that? --Dewsplash (talk) 22:01, October 23, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 22:01, October, 23, 2015

Well, it needs to match the rogue, so you'll need to darken it...

'''Reuploaded, I can't go much darker then this. 00:47, October 24, 2015 (UTC)'''

its still green. 09:41, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

and his nose should be black. 11:03, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Where did his whiskers go??

I can see the whiskers just fine...? But can you smooth out the main body shading? 20:57, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

no the whiskers seemed to have disappeared on the sides of his face 21:21 Mon Oct 26

'''Reuploaded, I have no idea how the whiskers vanished. 00:33, October 27, 2015 (UTC)'''

He looks still kinda green. Are you using highlights? 03:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

A cat's fur isn't completely black, it has a very small amount of saturation to it, and in this case I chose green to match the eyes. I will see if I can get the highlights to be less saturated to better match the rouge, I do agree that he is a bit too green. 17:10, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Green is probably...not the best color to try. Green is a huge no-no in this project and it's kinda shot on sight... How about a blue? That might work. ^^

Reuploaded Your right, blue does work better in this case. I usually use green when I need to saturate my blacks, but I see why it isn't as appealing to others. 18:02, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Storm (Ro) (ES) ~ CBA
butchered Breezy's pattern im so sorry 02:38, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

There is a little speck of waste above her head. Lovely! -- 12:37, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you! 13:04, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

there is waste beetween the front  legs. Belllastar (talk) 14:46, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:52, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty! CBA? 17:04, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I see a few places that this image doesn't quite match... I think the texture should be lightened a bit, And the stripes can be smoother. And on the queen and starclan images the stripes kind of look like "^v^v"s, if you know what I mean. Can you also define eye depth? This one's just preference though.

She's matching the rogue. the star and all should match /that/. Tbh i think it's fine and I'm continuing the CBA. 10:29, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The reason I tell her to match queen and starclan is because they're on the same side???

im gonna be blunt here, but the textures, colors and the way the stripes are blurred should match the rogue, regardless of the same side, it still should match in color (imho it doesn't but whatever). The things you pointed out are all to do with the actual quality. 12:30, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ember (ES) - CBA
09:42, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nice. Smudge the tail shading a bit? 09:33, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded actually just drew on the shading this time, but thanks 17:35, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Jagged Peak (Alt ES) ~ For Approval
wow he's adorable. Belllastar (talk) 13:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Did you forget the earpink? lol. Thicken the shading on the main body; nice job! 14:11 Sat Oct 24

Define the light on the legs and tail. 14:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Ya I did and I struggled with tail shading, but i will try again --Belllastar (talk) 14:19, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define overall shading. 14:46, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups what do you think of the crippled foot, and can somebody fix the link to his page Belllastar (talk) 15:32, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front legs/chest a little bit more. 18:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define facial shading a bit? He gets these great images and he's so annoying, heh --Dewsplash (talk) 01:07, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 01:07, October, 25, 2015

I think the stripes taper a bit more on his other images. they also seem to be more hard edged and they seem to be darker. 09:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I disagree aboat the stripes but i'm fixing the shading right now Belllastar (talk) 13:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Fff I was looking at the wrong image. Lease define the shading depth. 14:27, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

And could you define the light on the front legs, maybe? 23:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes just a tiny bit. Also define the light on the chest and face, if that's not already been said (I'm kinda tired and can't focus). Also, define the ear pink- it's pretty much all in shadow, I think, and I can't see it at all.

Cloudspots (ES) ~ For Approval


diffine shadeing and in the other images the chest marking is shaped more like a triangle. Belllastar (talk) 16:47, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~

Awww, so cute! Love Cloudspots. Can you define the shading on the left arm? 03:47, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to define your highlights a tiny bit more. Very cute! 17:20, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Thunder (ES) - CBA
bruh 17:27, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

this is HORRIBLE thunder would NOT BE proud. Lighten the shading on the back you dumdum 17:37, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

This is not horrible, its better then many of us could do! Make the nose a little pinker Belllastar (talk) 18:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Icy was just joking, bell. Do you mind smudging the white on his paws just a tad? 22:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think all of the white could be smudged a bit more.

Reuploaded. Icy I'm not listening to you anymore rip 20:25, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

So ugly. No comments before approval? 03:56, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

mabey turn the shadeing into a more brown color? Belllastar (talk) 22:05, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

The tint is fine. Re-CBA? 22:07, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

then lighten it Belllastar (talk) 22:34, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Bell it's fine 22:36, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

It really is. I looked at it from two screens. Re-CBA? (and if you're going to break a bca change the title.) 22:37, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Redthistle (Star) - For Approval
So pretty, so much fun to do :o I feel like I butchered the design... 20:20, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her a little bit? She's gorgeous --Dewsplash (talk) 20:57, October 24, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 20:57, October, 24, 2015

Nice. :) Do you want the file for the med cat? I can send it if you like. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 21:17, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 22:58, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Thanks (: I removed a very low opacity highlight layer I had and turned the 3rd shading layer on the tail back on. And yes the file would be very appreciated! My email is danielle.j.palmer95@gmail.com (not my main one so I don't really care if its seen) 01:01, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lets see... The way you smudged the main pelt makes it look like her body is a flat sheet of paper covered in fur. Could you possibly curve the way you smudged it a bit, and make it flow with he body more? I'm sorry if that sounded rude. 03:26, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Ugh. So I lost the original file I had for it so I had to redo it. Color picked from med cat, and attempted to match it better after looking at it without shading. I will probably redo the main body markings within the next couple days >.< 20:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe expand the shading on the main body? This is so gorgeous *.* ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:28, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

reupped ^^ And this is how far the shading really goes. I darkened it so it would be a little more obvious but the way I do shading can sometimes make it look a bit odd or seem receded ^.^ 00:44, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Pink Eyes (ES) ~ CBA
All colors from the rogue. 22:40 Sat Oct 24

His eyes look blue, not pink. Could you change that? 22:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Its just his pupils that are pink, I think. Its fine- it matches the rogue. 22:56, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

In albinistic cats, it's actually only the pupils that are pink/red. Usually the rest of the eye is blue. 23:02 Sat Oct 24

In the rogue image the whole eye is pink though... 23:05, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

NVM, I wasn't looking at it close enough. 23:06, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I understand the pink pupil thing, but isnt the rouge charart's eyes amber? Correct me if I'm wrong.

The rogue charart's eyes are blue, with a pink pupil, not amber. It's just hard to tell because there's not much of the eye visible on the rogue. 01:00, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall?

Re-uploaded. <span style="">1:52 Mon Oct 26

make the puples pinker ~belllastar

I colorpicked off the rogue image. <span style="">20:36 Mon Oct 26

Looks brilliant to me. CBA? 17:03, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Birch (ES) - For Approval
Ok, so, I had to use another computer to upload this, mine's acting weird. It looked like it matched better on my computer... so idk. 00:02, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Would you like the file? Also, his eyes are hazel [yellow-green], rather than green. 00:14, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changed the eye color, also fiddled with the stripes and shading. Thanks for the offer, but I'd like to do this without the file, if possible. 00:46, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still seeing green eyes... Can you also define main body/belly shading? Lovely =3

Re-uploaded 15:06, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

This is gorgeous. CBA?

Sorry but i think the chest shading could be smoothed a bit more. 01:56, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

and expanded 05:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Waste between the front legs 18:20, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Daisytoe (Star)- For Approval
How do you not thumb the images, idk ;-; Anyway, here is my Daisytoe starclan thingy ;u; Idk how to not thumb the images im so sorry DX

Sagestream (talk) 02:50, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

-- Reups - Forgot grey paws oops Sagestream (talk) 02:56, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yo, this is pretty good! Maybe blur/smudge the shading a bit? Also, to not thumb the images, sue source mode and simply get rid of the "thumb". 03:20, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Thanks, Burnt c: Sagestream (talk) 03:32, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white a lot. --Dewsplash (talk) 03:37, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 03:37, October, 25, 2015

Reups Sagestream (talk) 03:41, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur and define shading and add eye depth. 03:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 04:00, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste (I think) bordering outside of the charart. Blur and define the shading some more.

Reups u.u Sagestream (talk) 04:23, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

You're uploading a different image every time. Please upload under File:Daisytoe.star.png to prevent the unnecessary deletion of images. 09:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. 12:14, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

The ears on the mickey mouse heads should be more rounded. Also, the base for the white is pure white, if that helps. (If you want the file, just ask.) 13:17, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Apologies, Burnt. it just kept popping up with the 'you have a file with this name already here' and i finally found the overwrite button... ^^' Sagestream (talk) 17:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading, please? 23:13, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sagestream (talk) 02:11, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

There's a strange darker blob on >>> that leg. Could you somehow fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:10, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

This image needs to be named Daisytoe.star.png so it works with the charart template on her page. Also, as a reminder, the next time you reserve an image, you also need to add a date. I've fixed it for you this time, but the next time, your image will be declined.

I think the shading is leaking from the lineart along the belly 17:06, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sagestream (talk) 02:03, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please name the file Daisytoe.star.png Like Skye told you. And the ears from the micky mouse pattern still need to be a little more rounder. Thre is also waste on her shoulder. 02:07, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups For me, it says it's name is Daisytoe.star.png.... Sagestream (talk) 02:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

-- OHH okay i found out the problem, i capitalized the 'Star' Sagestream (talk) 02:20, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The waste is still there. 02:44, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's gone?? Sagestream (talk) 03:23, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't see waste... And since you know what you're doing, I'm promoting you into an apprentice. 03:25, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Ok what you're already an apprentice ^^; next time put the title as For Approval 03:26, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I was a kit when I first made this image so that's why it was "For Evaluation" :p Sagestream (talk) 04:06, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

White's looking gray. Nice job! 05:18, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

My main pelt layer is actually pure white; maybe it's the shading? Sagestream (talk) 05:37, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the stomach we=here the tail and the elbow meets. 12:42, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Gorsestar (ES) - For approval
until 70/right where we are 12:19, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

The base itself looks to be a fair bit lighter than what you have, and I think the stripes could have a bit of lighter fur between them... they look a bit too spaced together compared to something like the rogue image. Yes, I know, it's not the same side, but I'm not entirely sure the stripes should be so close together and the base that dark where I can't even see the stripes themselves on the flank.

Re-uploaded The base is actually nearly white! If this looks too dark, it's probably the shading. The shading has 3 layers (a tint, the main shading base, and a highlight area.) I defined the spacing between the stripes instead. I matched the deputy on this one, which doesn't seem to space out that much. 13:39, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's the texture or stripe-smudge, but I'm not sure.

Define shading? Sagestream (talk) 01:50, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:54, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:02, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom, only leads can CBA things, not apprentices. And please define the ear pink 11:02, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, Fox ;__; I didn't know about that. I promise it won't happen again. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:10, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine, just please don't do it again. @burnt: please define the facial shading 12:24, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrow Fur (ES) ~ For Approval
I'm still not sure if "same markings" mean same coloring, so I'm gonna leave this lovely brown for now. If any of you objects then I'll redo this

She's beautiful! Define shading a little? 14:58, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups 

she shouldnt have white, only on her belly and paws. and i think the markings should be the same colour. 17:30, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Personally I don't think the marking need to be the same color but that's just what I think. --Dewsplash (talk) 17:59, October 25, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 17:59, October, 25, 2015

Sparrow Fur has the same tortoiseshell markings as Turtle Tail. At the very least, the pattern itself should be similar to Turtle Tail's. The color can be up for interpretation, I suppose.

So does this looks like Turtle Tail's enough? (I'm so lazy I literally just added one layer of marshmallow on top of the chocolate) I should probably redo the pattern later =P

It's decided that she should match colours as well as pattern as Turtle Tail. Can you match the new Turtle Tail? 06:18, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Um, I never once said that. I said the pattern itself should match. We don't know if the colors are the same or not; the pattern should be the only thing that matches- the colors are fine.

There is a random very bright white patch on her back. Could you fix that? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 12:08, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Yea it was bothering me earlier too. And for those of you who think the chest shading looks strange and are too lazy to comment, I fixed that too =P

The white's looking kind of brownish. Great job. 05:14, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (ES) ~ For Approval
I'm really not happy with this but eh 19:57, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading; I can barely see it. 20:06, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:09, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading near wear the chest meets his front left leg. 18:58, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. 15:53, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Juniper Branch ~ For Approval
C'est horrible 15:46, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the shading? Sagestream (talk) 22:21, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think brightening shading on a cat like this is actually going to be possible or do it justice. It's dark navy-black shading, and the cat has a near-black base. If you meant 'lighten', I also don't think that'll do much for it because I'll be told to define it again what with the dark base. 00:22, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Please do lighten the shading. I cannot see the pattern underneath it. 14:34, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink more? (if needed?) I love this so much <3 wish I can shade black cats properly D;

Reups I only lightened it five percent, because otherwise I couldn't see it. Also, at the start I used a lighter black to see the lineart better - I forgot to put the real colour back at the end, so I've done that. Also, changes are here 16:40, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Alder (ES) ~ For Approval
Snowfall-girl ^^ 18:13, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

The entire pelt is supposed to be flecked in white, and there shouldn't be any large patches of gray.

Re-ups 23:33, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Expand the shading everywhere. 08:29, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 12:23, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the earpink more? (if needed?) I love this so much <3 wish I can shade black cats properly D;

Spotted Fur (ES) ~ For Approval
These new blanks are super rad 8D <span style="">03:27, 27, 10, 2015

Beautiful image! Could you make the facial shadow sharper, just a little? I love this! <3 ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:34, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you :> <span style="">16:10, 27, 10, 2015

The dapples seem to be a slightly different color than on the other images. Maybe it's just my screen, or the shading/highlights or something. Anyway, this is a beautiful image! 20:58, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could define the ear pink just a little? It's a little hard to see. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:36, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tbh the ear pink matches his other images ouo 12:23, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Flashnose (Star) ~ For Approval
I'm so happy Doestar was approved! I decided to do Flashnose this time, to challenge myself with a tabby pattern. I don't think I done the stripes any good, and any .xcf files would be very appreciated! Comment away. ^.^ ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 03:41, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm.... I have the file for the queen, I just need to find it. Would you like it? 03:56, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Never mind, I lost the file, sorry. As for the image, try and add more stripes. Nice. 05:41, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much! I'm sorry you lost the file, but I think I can cope without it for now. I added more stripes to the flank and head. Hopefully now this looks better than the previous version. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:28, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be more smudged, but that's just me. Very pletty by the way!

Define the shading on the face. Very Nice~ 22:38, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main part of her body. so gorgeous :o 23:50, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you guys so much <3 I expanded the shading on the main body and face, so hopefully you can all see it better. I also smudged the stripes a little more. :) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 00:22, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Would you like the file for the warrior? There's several markings hidden by the shading that you're lacking right now, and I'm sure it'll help with colors and stuff too! 01:35, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The white seems to go up a little bit higher on the other images. Nice job! 05:11, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks a ton! @Rainlegs: I think I'm ok actually, I'll just observe the marking a little more and fix them up in the next upload. For this upload, I expanded the white on the muzzle. I think the queen is the side I have to match? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:11, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tall stripes appear to be over smudged- please sharpen them 12:22, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Lightningtail (ES) - For Approval
Don't tell me to lighten him- he's a black cat, and it's actually said in Path of Stars that he blends in with the shadows around him, so I'd rather not make him any lighter.

Define Shading? Sagestream (talk) 05:03, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on the face doesn't seem to flow with the fur. Lovely job, as always, Jayce. 05:08, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I have nothing to say but a job well done, Jayce Jaysnow (talk) 05:10, October 28, 2015 (UTC)JaysnowJaysnow (talk) 05:10, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Owl Eyes ES- For Approval
Hello yes it's been a while since I've done any original art for the site, so I started easy with a solid! I've learned a few new things from Sai, I don't use GIMP anymore. Thoughts or critiques? (I also need a new signature holy hell)  07:28, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

There isn't texture on the kit, I believe. I think the light on the legs could be expanded too. Great job on this! (Those big eyes *.*) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:34, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I don't believe that's texture; I think that's how his shading and highlights are, Blossom.

Well I did give him a teeny tiny bit of texture, I thought he looked a tad bit flat without it and I thought it was artist's choice but I can remove it! 07:40, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Images have to match though, I think you should remove it, also, he's looking green... 07:51, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge or blur the ear pink more? It just looks a tad hard edged ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 11:13, October 28, 2015 (UTC)