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Luna (KP) - For Evaluation
Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:59, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Get rid of every other white thing except for the tail-tip. Unless specifically stated to have other white points, we follow our tortoiseshell rule here. Also don't align your images. 14:01, 11/12/2016

And this image needs to be renamed to File:Luna.kittypet.png 14:04, 11/12/2016

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 14:42, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you brighten the tail-tip? It looks a little too gray to me. 14:42, 11/12/2016

define the shading on the legs and tmake the brown a little less green looking. 15:59, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:09, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Do you mind smudging the brown and ginger a bit?

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 16:50, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the tail and legs? 02:57, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 05:41, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the depth in the shading and give it some shape; it looks rather flat and I'm having some trouble making it out.

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:54, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

could you whiten the tail tip please?

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:26, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some more depth to the shading? The way I'd do it is add a 'base' shading that's darker and less blurred than the rest. I can give you an example if you don't know what I mean.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:24, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Give me an example, please Джулия де Мортон (talk) 14:56, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Okay so you add a base shading, sorta like this (blur/smudge it off course) and that's how I give my images depth. Of course, this shouldn't be exact, adjust yours so it matches your shading placement.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:11, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 12:42, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

There seems to be an irregular amount of ear pink on the --> ear.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:43, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 09:22, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:11, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Джулия де Мортон (talk) 13:22, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Darken some more, please?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:04, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Still working? 01:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Curlypaw (KP) ~ For Approval
i redid the base color and ear pink to match the apprentice —  Minkclaw   19:38, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Theres waste around the left ear. 19:52, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Remove the texture, as the apprentice image that was posted before yours does not have texture.

The base on this still looks a lot darker than the other image

I color picked it from the Apprentice, so I think its alright? —  Minkclaw   20:36, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   20:42, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

The nose is empty, and there's still waste around the <--- ear, like Breeze mentioned.

Re-Upps waste removed, gray cats don't have pink noses, they have dark gray —  Minkclaw   03:08, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

the nose must match the apprentice. there's grey cats with pink noses in this series already. 23:12, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

I think the eyes must be blue 02:15, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   17:32, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking a bit on the back foot and haunch, and the nose pink should match that of the apprentice. 19:54, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Lighten/smudge the shading.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  02:37, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, forgot to put this —  Minkclaw   03:53, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the nose, or something along those lines, so the bright color doesn't just jump out at you? You have a few pixels to work with, so it's possible to do.

Re-Upps fixed the brightness of the nose pink some as well as added shading —  Minkclaw   22:56, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Her apprentice image has a nose color of #DD8AA6, this one has a nose color of #7A4949 (that's the brightest color I see on the nose since it's shaded.). Just saying. 02:33, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Forgot to mention, there's also waste around the < ear. I can open up the image, take out my color-picking tool, and I would find red-pink colors.02:35, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps, I've already removed the waste there's no more.. —  Minkclaw   21:17, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

There is, but it's very light. Take out your color picking tool and sweep it outside the lineart. I can still see the waste there. 01:43 November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   03:18, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. <span style="">14:13, 11/27/2016

The waste around the ear is still there; it's further out but I can still see it.

Re-Upps, since the Apprentice was declined I changed the eye color back to amber, re-added shading, also dd shading depth but its a little darker than before. —  Minkclaw   21:22, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is waste around all the image. 21:24, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   21:34, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

There is a transperant pixel--> along the very bottom of the tail. 21:39, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   21:52, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed.

i don't see it? I followed the eye thing from the Apprentice's tutorial plus I used some of the other KP as examples. —  Minkclaw   03:22, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

I can move one of the eye's over a little if that's what needed? —  Minkclaw   15:03, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

That's exactly what I was going to ask you to do. Mobile doesn't allow for in-depth comments.

Re-Upps, moved the right eye over just a tad. —  Minkclaw   22:24, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

It looks like there's a ... idk, but there's a part of the texture or something missing from --> eye and the surrounding area, and it seems like it was just cut out of the image.

It wasn't really missing I just seemed to have made that area darker for some odd reason —  Minkclaw   17:13, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Expand the lighting on the hip? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:17, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

what do you mean? I think its fine? —  Minkclaw   17:08, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Imma agree with Jayie here; there's very little light on the hip. The shading there is much overblurred and could actually use some depth, as well.

Re-Upps thats all im gonna remove, I removed the most of it. —  Minkclaw   15:46, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

I think there's some shading waste in the space between the back paw and the front paw. 00:51, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps —  Minkclaw   15:22, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail; the shading looks a bit flat and it seems to be all one color. there should be at least some variation due to shading and lighting.

I'll have this uploaded tomorrow after school, I've been at the hospital all weekend. —  Minkclaw   04:37, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Upps I don't know if this is good enough for the tail light? —  Minkclaw   16:49, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth/light on the very front -> paw? It looks a bit flat, and almost all of it looks the same shade.

Quailkit (Star) ~ For Approval
RECLAIM! Anyways, just touched up little Quailie, and added a bit of criticism from the other Quailkit for approval. --

The white still needs to be dulled quite a bit. It's way too bright. Could you also smudge/smooth it out? <span style="">14:16, 11/27/2016

The colors on this need to match the other image. 15:49, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Like Waterclaw said, colors need to match, especially ear pink, eyes and pelt color. Sorry if this is repeating. Winterpaw: <span style="color:#ff9966;font-family:Palatino;font-size:14px;background:Black;border: 2px solid black;border-radius:1em;"> I am  a  true Monster  22:40, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Colors no longer have to match, due to the other image being withdrawn. Could you smooth out the shading a bit? It abruptly cuts off, or so it seems, and it should be a bit smoother on the body and tail.

Re-uploaded TFW you leave your computer alone for a minute to get food and the next you almost upload a charart with a gun above it because your brother graffitied over your art --

Blur the chest shading a tad. It's a bit too sharp. 03:28, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Brightened the belly 'cause I noticed it was way too dull and I had trouble seeing it. --

Smooth out the shading a bit more in general. 21:36, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

I know you don't have to match the other image, but if this one has white on the bottom of the chest like the last one (I can't tell), then maybe lighten the shading on the white so we can see it better? If there isn't white there, then ignore this. :P Also, smooth out the shading on the shading on the tail, and have it follow the curve of the tail more, and not quite the sharp curve that it's on now that has the entire tip cast in shadow, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:29, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded it's actually the belly, not the bottom of the chest, Jayie. If I got my way, Quailkit would have a much bigger belly than he does RN, but other PCA'ers disagreed. I want a bigger area, sniffle sniffle. I also tried to do the tail as depicted in Sunjaw's guide, but it's long-haired, so I tried...? my best to do it as a shorthair. --

I think with this shading placement, there should be more shading at the top of the back. Can you add some there please? Also, smudge/blur the ear pink.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:08, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-upload --

Nice^ Perhaps define the eye depth some.

'Re-upped Re-upped? Is that a word? --

Add some shading to the top of the head? Also, I might nit picking here, but I think the shadings a little solid. Lighten/blur/smudge a little?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:07, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Milkfur (MV) (Q) ~ For Approval
First queen and white cat. Comments? I tried to match the other image's shading. -

could you smooth the texture/shading, can't tell which it is, but it looks blotchy? —  Minkclaw   21:23, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, I was trying to match the other image. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Hello World!  22:50, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job :) Perhaps even out the texture some, mainly on the body and tail.

Re-Ups Thanks! - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  01:10, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

Give the overall shading a bit more depth, especially on the tail and stomach. Remember, a pregnant cat would have a fairly rounded belly and the shading should show that with the depth.

Re-ups Thanks for that! I think it's okay now? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  00:57, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

it looks like there's some white leaking into the <-- ear —  Minkclaw   17:21, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, and have the shading on the tail follow the direction of the fur more, if that makes sense. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 00:31, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  23:00, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:09, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  13:10, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

There's some waste just above the head. 18:18, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  20:46, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

I loooove the design for this! Anwyays, if I'm not mistaken, the blue on the <--- eye is leakeing onto the black part, I think? 20:57, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  11:31, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Dragonflykit (Star) - CBA
I wanted to give him wings 05:44, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

this is nice ^^ can you smoothen the ear pink down just a tad on the <== ear —  Minkclaw   15:35, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe shrink the gray on the chest - he only has a patch on his left side on the kit image. I also think that I'd made the stripes just a very tiny bit darker on the kit, too.

Re-uploaded 01:44, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Voleclaw (Star) ~ CBA
I color picked from the warrior. 22:20, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

Looking good! Mind darkening the shading on the tail and flank? 00:48, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

I think the shading's leaking a bit on the <--- shoulder. 21:27, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload, the shading was looking a bit flat so I also added depth  23:52, December 7, 2016

CBA?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:09, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Ivy (Lo) - CBA
one day ill figure out how to shade these goddamn blanks (ive been saying for nearly 6 years) 22:54, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

could you darkent he shading please —  Minkclaw   15:06, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

i can define it but i'm not going to darken it, not all shading has to be super totally really dark, not to mention i can easily see it on my screens as it is. 19:51, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded thought i uploaded this yetserday but mustve fallen asleep before i did 19:52, December 9, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Cherrytail (Lo) ~ For Approval
>< I can't tortoiseshell very well

There's a reason why I'll probably never attempt to do tortoiseshells. XD This tint of orange looks a little...green (I think) compared to the tint on the rest of the images. If that makes sense. 01:10, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded slightly tinted to match better, but I'd already picked this from the kp, so I only did it a little.

It's still looking green. Maybe colorpick from one of the lighter parts of the image, as I think you colorpicked from a shaded part. 05:19, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The orange looks too blurred/smudged compared to the other images. Can you sharpen them?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:10, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Not to intrude or anything but could you possibly have this match her other images more, the tortoiseshell pattern seems off? —  Minkclaw   20:53, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Played with the placement some; somewhat basing off the queen since they show most of the same areas of her. Idk it doesn't exactly match the apprentice, but it shows a different side than that, and I think it matches the queen.

Finpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 00:52, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Looking great! Mind blurring where the ginger meets the rest of the pelt, and blur a little bit of his paler parts? 01:07, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks. 01:12, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps smudging (not blurring) the line between the ginger and the brown with a small brush could make it appear more natural? 15:35, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

can u maybe make the ginger curve w the body or smth? more like sandynose since he's supposed to be a clone of his dad 20:05, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:34, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading and the --> ear pink.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:11, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 04:28, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Puddleshine (Ro) ~ For Approval
Okay but he's precious and I love him  <span style="">01:04 Sat Dec 10 

Could you lighten the shading a bit between the torso and the shoulder?

Reups  <span style="">01:08 Sat Dec 10 

Since he's still performing his medicine cat duties, I think you could get away with adding herbs to this? He's not just a rogue.

I like drawing plants :D  <span style="">21:25 Sat Dec 10 

Ooooh, the plant thing was a good idea! Very creative! Define earpink on the frontmost ear BTW. --

reups  <span style="">02:00 Sun Dec 11 

Archeye (Star) - For Approval
Questions: Since my first image was approved, do I still need to put "for evaulation", and second, I wasn't sure if I should add the patchy pelt or not, but I did anyway just to be safe. And I decided to try something harder...ha...what a great idea... 01:21, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

First image was approved, so this'll be 'For Approval' instead.

Great job^ Super tiny thing, but to match the other image, add a tiny bit of pink on the tail tuft of fur.

'''Reups. '''Thanks! 19:01, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Can you smudge/blur the ear pink a little? Also, with the tail tuft of fur, can you make it two pixels thick where it sticks outside the original lineart?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  03:13, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reups The pixel expansion was a pain, but I think I did it justice? 04:02, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Reups  Got rid of some waste and fixed the tail pixel 20:03, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Ratscar (R) ~ For Approval
15:28, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Filou (Ki) ~ For Approval
15:33, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Shoot, I forgot to blur/smudge the stripes. I'll fix that later. 15:38, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Awesome!! Perhaps fill in the nose? - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106  Ready for ANYTHING!  18:26, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Great job as always. Define the earpink; I can't even see it. 03:54, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) - For Evaluation
Alright, my second attempt for a Charart. I saw another image named this...was that declined? Probably, because it wasn't on his page. Anyways, I hope this looks good. 06:50, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

The other one was withdrawn. Define the shading and make the earpink less purple-ish if you're able to. And please, don't align your images. Remove the |left code off the image, if you can't seem to figure it out. 07:06, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sure, I'll do all of that tomorrow. Just a question, why does the ear color have to be less purple? It looks pink enough to me, but I'm down with whatever. Opinions, anyone? 07:09, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Too much of a purple hue can make it look more bubblegum than earpink, and it looks a little unnatural. I think it could use a little more pink. 10:55, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:48, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Branch (HJ) - For Approval
dont we all love it when our art programs hate us and our siblings pester us and we need food 23:15, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart, and it also needs to be named in the correct format to File:Branch (HJ).kit.png.

Donee 23:27, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

It only says "Branch.ki.png, are you missing the t? Also, define the earpink a little, I can barely see it. 23:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading as well, and add a bit more depth to it. 05:58, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaddedd  21:34, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading again please. It's still hardly noticeable. (btw I love the design you gave him!) 21:39, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink again as well; I couldn't see it on mobile or laptop very well.

Reuploaded  03:19, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Toad (HJ) (R)- For Evaluation
Uploaded 02:46, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:49, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Defined Shading 02:55, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

He's described as mottled so please add some. 04:05, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

What is mottled agsin? #brainfart.Anyways I will fix him tomorrow. 04:11, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

It's kinda like blotchy spots (sometimes small and sometimes large--really depends on what you want) all over the cat's body. They are usually bigger than freckles. If you want some examples, look at Applefur_(NP), Oatspeckle (though that's more defined because it's part of her description), Fircone and Lichen. Carpkit  is also a good one, and every other artwork with mottles on them. I hope this helps! I'm still a newbie so maybe someone else can explain it better. 04:29, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

This probably sounds like I'm repeating Vector, however, it doesn't have to be exactly like the mottles on the other images. The mottles you have on his body are more placed to one spot as it just looks like big dark brown patches so if you even it out and smudge/blur I think it'd be good. —  Minkclaw   17:30, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Redid pattern- 20:39, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

can you smudge/blue the little specks there I see. I can't tell if its texture or? —  Minkclaw   20:54, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Blurred texture.- 21:22, December 13, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define shading? <span style="">02:56, 12/14/2016

Defined Shading 03:45, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

he's looking a bit green. 03:52, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

I'll fix that, is it the shading or the cat itself? 03:53, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

it's the base brown colour you've used I think, using a brown that's more towards an orange/red would probably help. 03:55, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 04:26, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Milkfur (RC) (Ki) - For Evaluation
0:30, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

The <--- ear pink is barely visible. Also, the shading on the front legs are a bit dark. Shypaw11 (talk)

Reuploaded. 0:53, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the ---> texture. 03:50, December 14, 2016 (UTC)