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Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Ah, tweaking. =D Anyway, it was on the list for shading, so, I just layered some shading overtop of the image, not major or anything. Okay, I think the OA was Snowfeather1 with some help along the way from Night shine. Comments? 02:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and blur them 03:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and chest. Elork  01:48, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid the shading. x.x 02:32, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge, blur, and lighten the earpink. 20:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 23:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

And thicken it. 15:59, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, ya still working on this? 19:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Read my comments on Brightflower. 05:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Could I take over? :P 18:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 18:42, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I redid the shading and the ear pink and replaced the highlights 19:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, next time, change the heading. XD 20:22, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger. :3 21:34, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) ~ Redone
Okay, it needed to match it's loner image, and it was pretty much impossible to tweak and get a fine result, so I ended up redoing it with permission. I did redo it, more of a tweak, on the same image, but I'll say it was redone, 'cause that's how it was except on the same image. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 00:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

His muzzle shouldn't be black, and make the earpink a bit more triangular. :P Sky To Kill An Empire 00:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the white on the chest paws and belly. 00:11, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the earpink by any chance? 01:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also redid the whole image because it didn't match the loner. 05:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Add the tufted ears ^^ 17:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh... 18:53, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Crop it some. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  00:15, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Crop what? If it's the tufted ears, it matches the other images. 02:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I meant crop it around the lineart. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  15:06, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the chest white parts a tad. 14:40, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. L) - Redone
In all technicality, I went through the tweaking process with this, but nothing was really left unchanged in the end, so this'll be called redone. XD OA was Moonflight and shading needed to be redone. 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the --> leg and haunch shading. 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

It may just be my computer, but, he looks tinted blue...o3o <3   19:02, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred it to the max. And yeah, the highlights are tinted blue cause white highlights look awful on black cats in my opinion. 19:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him tinted a little less blue and more black? Sorry, but it looks kinda odd. He's smexy otherwise, though<3 20:59, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading as it is looks fine, but I do think you could smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. 01:04 Sun Feb 19

It's not fine...he looks blue. Black and blue are two totally different colors. If anything, just make it so the highlighted areas don't look dark blue. =P 01:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think Paleh can choose if she wants to change it, but in the defense of blue-tinted highlights, they do look much better, and more natural than white highlights. It's not like the picture is Bluestar's kind of blue :P 01:15 Sun Feb 19

Reuploaded - Well since I still don't wanna put white highlights on him, I desaturated them a bit, but they're still blue tinted. Is this better? 03:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, much better. If he were any bluer, I'd have voted to have his name changed to Bluestar. XDDDD 03:38, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the pelt more into the ear? 03:59 Sun Feb 19

Can you define the tail shading a bit moar C: 16:55, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Frecklewish (A) - Redone
This is the exact same as the MCA except without the herbs. Not really anything to change.... *shrugs* OA was Scarlet. 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

It's Frecklewish, not Fracklewish, so I fixed that for you. I agree, there's nothing else to change. 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Er...It's minor, but can you smudge the pelt into the earpink? 06:12, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'd rather not. If it was fine on the MCA it should be fine on here. Sorry. 20:09, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (W) ~ Redone
Hope this is okay.. It was very fun making him. xD And thank you for Stoney who let me borrow the xcf. file ^^ Had to be redone to match deputy image, and since it was a triangular tabby. OA was Goldenpaw, I think... 20:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Very pretty Misty ^^ Enlarge the earpink a little. 20:29, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Upload it under File:Sharpclaw (SC).warrior.png ,20:30,February 19,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Knew I got the file name wrong or something.. >.< Renamed it and enlarged the earpink. Thanks Mountain. ^^ 20:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should darken the shading, it looks a little light next to the deputy image. Sky Everyone likez teh cats 02:32, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for such a late upload.. x.x Darkened the shading. 22:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Slightly shrink the earpink. :3 06:58, 23, 02, 2012

Sharpclaw (Ki) - Redone
M'kay, needed to be redone to match the deputy image. Original artist was moi. Kits are soo small! Dx 02:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

He's so cute! Spread the stripes out more. ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  03:34, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make his nose pink like the kittypet and rogue images. 15:10, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

The nose pink is fine since the rogue and kittypet are going to be redone. Blur the earpink a tad. So cute! ^^ 16:54, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white pixels in the eyes....white. XD Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 12:12, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:51, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give him the slightly lighter chest & muzzle like in his other images? Elork  13:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W) - Redone
Okay, Willowclaw. OA was Bramble, then Sky. Was redone due to shading. :3 Comments? 17:46, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink a but. 17:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, but? You may have been on that site too much xD Blur the shading and maje the earpink less red. Ugh, Willowclaw. I hated that redo xD Sky Everyone likez teh cats  05:08, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Maje? Sky, you've got it too. :3 Anyways, Reuploaded. 23:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Tadpole (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Shading needed to be redone and I centered the earpink as best as I could. OA = Flaminingmom. 18:48, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly add highlights? He's kinda dark. 18:53, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. -Fail- 19:01, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tad. Also fixed the title for you ^^. 19:37, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks ^.^. Re-Uploaded. 17:54, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the ears. C: 22:04, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

XD -derp- Re-Uploaded. 22:26, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (E) - Redone
OA was me, with tweaks by Moonflight and Sparklestream. Needed to match other charats. Comments? 01:30, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Is he supposed to have torn ears? o3o Sky Everyone likez teh cats 05:04, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 12:00, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry for the lack of work, I was in a really bad mood yesterday, so I wanted to play it safe. 23:48, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Percy (Ro) - Redone
OA was Cherryfur123. I reserved this before the tweak/redo nominations thing passed. I feel that the stripes looked kind of odd and the shading was weak, and I got permission, but if enough don't agree, then just decline this because I don't want people fighting. Image not showing. Pattern is based off my real cat so I'm not changing the pattern. 02:07, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hickory!!! <33 Can you make the earpink more red? :3 You're fine Ivy. 02:09, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little? Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 12:10, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded You got it right, that's who this is ^^ 05:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink where it's smudged. 07:01, 23, 02, 2012

Hickory!! <3 You finally made him! ^^ Anyways, blur the earpink all around actually, and define the shading a bit. 18:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MCA) ~ Redone
Redone to match her new images. Comments? 02:32, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shiny part on the eyes <3 02:33, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Brightsky (W) - Redone
Alright... original artist was Nightflower, with a couple of tweaks by Elorisa, and then Scarletwind taking over, and the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 18:40, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Sky Promises, promises 13:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and can you change back the foot lineart? Elork  13:35, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is the paw lineart thick enough? 18:33, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

It's not about it being thick, it's about it not being changed at all. Just paste the old lineart over it, unedited. And blur the ginger on the ear, and possibly get rid of the patch on the whiskers, or make it bigger. It seems a bit out of place since it's just inbetween the whiskers. 20:06, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like part of the patch on the head (that goes over the eye) isn't smudged.. Can you fix that? 22:23, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I utterly loathe the paw lineart. It looks too blocky. 00:28, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The ginger on the ear still seems a bit hard edged (it's probably just cause the earpink's over it, but it still needs to be fixed) and the paw lineart's not the same. While I agree it's a bit blocky, you can't just change it whenever you like. Suggest it to be tweaked if it bothers you that much, but you're not allowed to just change it on a whim. Please fix it. 18:36, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I believe it looked like this. 21:18, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (KP) - Redone
Needed to match other images. No comment. x.x OA was Paleclaw, I believe. :3 Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 00:42, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Could you fix his eyes, so he doesn't look like he's dizzy? 02:47, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? xD Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 02:52, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Use more than two colours, pretty please, and spread out the shades so there's more depth than a line of very light and very dark green. 03:19, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

He's still a bit cock-eyed. 04:54, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Q) ~ Redone
This is the last of Ashfoot's images to be redone. The reasons are the same as the others. OA is Nightshine. 03:23, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. c: Sky Promises, promises  13:46, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:29, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Ki) ~ Redone
It needed to be redone to match the other images. OA was Mosspath. Torties x.x *dies* You might need to check file history. Comments? 03:27, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 04:56, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:59, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Although it's minor, shrink the earpink? 07:06, 23, 02, 2012

Mothwing (A) ~ Redone
Had to be redone to match the other images. Comments? 14:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful Shelly. Define the depth in the eyes. 14:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose(MC) ~ Redone


Was told to redo. Ew...Comments?... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons, and make the ear pink bigger. 02:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, the patches... Try looking at Spiderstar for what patches ought to look like on short-furred cats. And could you go back to the old pattern? I'd rather not have to redo the MCA unless absolutely necessary. 02:29, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Also, define the shading so it actually shows up on the white, please. 02:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please go back to the old pattern. Redoing doesn't necessarily mean changing the pattern. There's no reason to redo his other images. Anyways, darken the gray to match and darken the shading all together. 18:30, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, me and another SM chat (not gonna mention names unless she tells me to) think this should be auto-declined, as it's definitely no 80% complete. 20:25, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lightningpelt (W) - Redone
It was on the redo list. I just redid the stripes, but I suppose that counts and a redo since it's half the charart. OA was Sandy, if memory serves Hawkfire, then I redid it. Comments? 02:43, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Aw man I wanted this ;) This is totally beautiful <33 Lighten the shading a tad. 02:46, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aye Sir! 02:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

That's one heck of a skunk stripe. XD Could you continue the stripe down her tail? It doesn't make much sense to stop there (not that it makes much sense anyway, skunk stripes are super rare) 02:50, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. <3333 05:00, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Littlecloud (W) ~ Redone
Same exact thing as the MC, so there shouldn't be any comments.... OA is Birchy. 17:35, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - Redone
I've always wanted to put this up. Original artist was Sparrowsong, with Bramble taking over, then Icestorm/Appledash redoing it, then redone by Frostheart which was declined, and then Rainfacestar took over, but she withdrew it. His stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 18:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ooooh, Lovely! ^^ Just blur and center the earpink and fix the paws and it'll be perfect. :) 18:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also define the shading a little? This is phenominal, great job! 19:07, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad (along with that Ivy said). This is amazing... I love it. Job well done. =) 19:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ... :')! 21:12, February 23, 2012 (UTC)