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AaU Revival?
I am attempting the revival of the Adopt a User project; however, my idea has quite a few flaws, and I hope to somehow resolve them with the help of this Wiki. Please comment on this forum. 09:16, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Senior Warrior Lead Votes
I started a discussion here. We still have unfinished things to take care of. Please comment. 17:43, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Swoop of Chestnut Hawk ~ Silver Nomination
I didn't actually edit this one, but I can't really see anything to edit. 01:23, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

does she have any quotes? otherwise looks good! *Canyonsong* *Warrior Of Fireclan*  01:41, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, durh. Of course she needs a quote or two XD I couldn't find any save for her main one, but if somebody can...? She doesn't say anything of consequence. 01:50, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

I found some quotes for her, and I changed the main quote, because I found one that better showed her personality. Hope I helped :) 11:23, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you muchly =) I don't own either of the books, so I had to search the browse-inside, and all I could find was the "eagle attack" quote. 23:33, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Someone else can take over if they wish. 05:55, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I think it still deserves silver :) At  el  da  19:27, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so I added two more quotes and expanded Sign of the Moon. Comments? At el  da  21:35, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Could you expand Outcast? Make sure SotM is sorted out in paragraphs so its not one giant section xD 22:26, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I seperated the paragraphs in the SoTM section, and expanded Outcast more. Comments? At el  da  01:03, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

I added one more short paragraph to the SotM section, and I think the article is ready. Awesome job! 22:10, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 22:27, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 21:03, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf ~ Silver Nomination
Her article looks good comments? 17:17, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Perhaps expand Spottedleaf's Honest Answer, Forest of Secrets, and in the first series, you might want to add a what she is doing in the dreams. Mainly just A Dangerous Path, and Rising Storm. At el  da  19:25, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

SkyClan's Destiny could also be expanded a bit, as well as Dawn. Also expand ^what Atelda said^, and it will be ready! xD 22:40, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

ok I expanded Spottedleaf's Honest answer, Rising Storm, Dawn and a dangerous path. I don't own all the books so I'll try to do what I can for Skyclan's destiny and Forest of Secrets but I might take a bit longer, and I couldn't word Spottedleaf's Honest answer quite right, if some could please help with that 19:24, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

does it look ok?

Comments???

Please, be patient. Many of us are extremely busy since its the end of the year and we all have a lot of schoolwork. Can SotC be expanded any more? And do you think you could go into more detail for The Fourth Apprentice? 22:12, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

sorry those were a day apart the dates just don't show 02:23, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur for family needs a reference, otherwise, I don't see anything else wrong. Good job. ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 19:24, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

The Power of Three and Omen of the Stars sections need to be expanded, they look short and choppy. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  00:00, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

they are short because she only appears briefly in dreams I'll see what I can do though 19:05, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

The Darkest Hour and New Prophecy Series looks really choppy. It's all smushed into one big paragraph. 20:49, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed some of the wording on Bluestar's Phophecy and also fixed the tense since it switched around. I'll look to see if there's anymore of that. 14:24, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Request
Can I join too??? Thanks Alot!!!

Yeah that was me Silvermoon8195 but I'm not sure how to put the signature Mistystar gave me. If you can teach me how that would be great!SILVERmoon8195 00:00, June 10, 2011 (UTC) (I do want to join)\

Oh, never mind. I know how to use it now.Thxs!  Silv erm  oon  ☾ 

Can I please join?  Silv erm  oon  ☾ 

Please sign with a signature, and yes, you may join, but I don't know your username so I can't add you in. 22:08, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, who is this? I should be archiving this, but I still don't know who wrote the message, and I'm too lazy to check through the extremely long page history. xD 22:26, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

It was Silvermoon8195. I was bored XD ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 16:35, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, but lets wait a few more days to see if she actually wants to join. :P 20:57, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join:)? Echoblaze 23:53, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool ~ Gold Nomination
This is currently supposed to be the feature article. I expanded the history a lot, especailly SotM, and I think its ready to be granted gold. Comments? 21:21, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

is there any quotes that show more of her personality, like one or two when she was super jealous of Dovepaw? and does she appear anymore in Sunrise? But the history looks awesome!

Well, she isn't really jealous now, anymore, so I don't know that those quotes would show her personality, but she doesn't appear any mroe in Sunrise. 00:09, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I added another quote. Anything else? 00:15, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Great job Mistystar! =D 10:59, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. I see nothing wrong with it. ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 19:28, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Her warrior needs to be removed, it hasn't been approved. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  00:05, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Really? I didn't put it there, some vandal must have. I'll remove it, or anyone else can. 00:09, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Removed. Anything else? 00:22, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nothing. It's beautiful. CBV? 18:47, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mousewhisker ~ Silver Nomination
Comments? 11:07, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Brilliant! Could Outcast, Sunrise, Fading Echoes and Sign of the Moon be expanded a bit? 20:00, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

And Long Shadows xD Maybe add one more quote? 04:10, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great! Could you possibly find/swith another quote for the main one. It doesn't quite describe his personality. At el  da  23:09, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'll try to find another quote. 23:40, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the history, but I don't know what quote to use for Mousewhisker's main quote. 09:37, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... Is there any quotes that come from the narrator? ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 21:47, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think so, but I'm not sure. I'll go check. 10:12, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I checked all the books, but I couldn't find anything that describes him. 07:45, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can Outcast be expanded anymore? 18:51, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you find a better quote? What's up there right now, doesn't seem very good. Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  19:52, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could Omen of the Stars be expanded? They look pretty short. 20:50, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try to expand and fix the quote. Please be patient. 01:55, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleclaw ~ Silver Nomination
Her page looks great to me! Comments? 11:39, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

can you say where they found the kits? and add 1-2 more quotes if you can look awesome!

Yeah, add a few more quotes. Great work! :) 04:03, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I added them. Anything else? 10:55, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job! I think its ready, but lets wait a few more days. 22:06, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

I agree! The article looks great! ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 19:31, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

So....anything else to fix? 07:43, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, I think it looks good. CBV? 20:15, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up. -- 15:56, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smokepaw ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded Dawn, and added a main quote and all the othere quotes he currently has, comments? 14:17, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a reference for the second trivia? 19:42, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, find that, and can you add one or two more quotes? Also, if possible, expand on Dawn by adding more details. Nice work! 22:03, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

The last trivia needs a reference too. Also, you might just want to check over grammar just in case. Good job! At el  da  23:17, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded Dawn found a reference and added two more quotes and fixed some grammer issues comments?

Great! But there's still a few grammer/spelling issues, so fix that, and its ready =) 22:14, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

I couldn't find any spelling mistakes I'm horrible at those

I'll help ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 19:32, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, done. Looks good! I don't see anything wrong with the article now. ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 19:37, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

thanks so much!

Its ready! I can't CBV this, yet, because there are too many vote up, but as soon as some of them are complete, I'll CBV this. =) 20:36, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

k thanks! 16:57, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 18:51, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is the quote where it just says "Smokepaw" really neccessary? 14:47, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftbreeze ~ Silver Nomination
I added some quotes, and I think she's ready. Comments? 07:14, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can Bluestar's Prophecy be expanded more? The article looks great though! =D 11:10, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, its great! Battles of the Clans could probably be expanded a bit about the part where Bluepaw and Swiftbreeze find Lionpaw. 20:54, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 20:52, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Did Swiftbreeze die while Bluestar was getting her nine lives? If not, fix that (I don't have my own copy of the book). Also, there is some grammar mistakes in the quotes. 14:53, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Done 16:57, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reedfeather ~ Silver Nomination
His article looks great! Comments? 11:08, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Possibly add more detail to battle of the clans! ❀ Atelda ❀ ~talk~ 14:49, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

yea and maybe 1-2 more quotes, looks good 16:55, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, expand the family section; Add Stormfur's kits, and any others you missed, along with their citations. :) And the things above. xD 20:51, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Will do! But, uh, could someone help me with the family section? I'm not really good at that. 07:21, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

I tried to expand Battle of the Clans, but there was nothing I could add in there. Dreamwhisper had this nominated before, and expanded it. As for the quotes and family section, I'll add it later. 01:56, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is there a better main quote that could be there? 20:53, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwing ~ Silver Nomination
I added all the quotes by her or the narrator that are related to her, and expanded Battles of the Clans by adding all the possible details, and adding another paragraph. I think its ready for silver. Comments? 21:43, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps clarify some parts because it's a bit confusing but otherwise I see nothing wrong with the article! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 18:40, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, clarified...Anything else? :D 16:46, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

None that I can see!  ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 21:17, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Molewhisker - Silver Nomination
He looks good to me. Comments? 21:07, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add a transition between the first two paragraphs, and you might want to go through the article to look for clarity and grammar issues. Other than that, it looks great! ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 22:40, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. :3 14:52, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Any more quotes? His article is awesome! 17:03, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Added one. 20:50, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! I see nothing wrong with it. 21:52, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Jay's Wing ~ Silver Nomination
I am a bit confused on the quotes because it's Jayfeather who is experiencing the things, but I do have some in mind. Dove's Wing has quotes but Dovewing isn't conscienc of her past life like Jayfeather is. So would someone clarify that for me? Otherwise I think his article looks good. ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 01:37, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should just give him the quotes he says while he's Jay's Wing. After all, the other ancient cats think he is Jay's Wing. 14:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I added three more quotes and a main one. Comments? ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 16:38, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! Can you find more quotes that show his personality better? Some of them don't really show anything about him. 17:24, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm...I'll try, but I'm not sure whether to include some from the narrator because the narrator is using Jayfeather's name rather than Jay's Wing. <span style="color:Lime;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:green;">❀ Atelda ❀ talk 21:16, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I guess you can use quotes from the narrator, as long as you include that its about Jay's Wing in the description. 21:55, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

So right now I am at my grandma's house for the rest of the week and I don't have the books with me. However, I'm about to check SoTM and LS from the library but I just wanted to give the heads up for the delay! <span style="color:Lime;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:green;"> ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 17:06, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) ~ Silver Nomination
I think it's ready! A lot of the references were wrong because of vandals, but I fixed them all. 20:32, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job. Some parts of the article are really confusing, so just real quickly clarify a few things. <span style="color:Lime;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background:black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 3em; color:green;"> ❀ Atelda ❀ talk 21:14, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Clarified. Anything else? 21:37, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

If possible, find another quote. Awesome job! 21:48, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I added another quote. 21:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Move the trivia section above the character pixels and expand Starlight. 08:23, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Done. It's hard to expand Starlight since she was only seen once in Starclan. 19:43, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Larchkit ~ Silver Nomination
I added a main quote, but there wasn't any other quote. 21:44, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a quote by the narrator that describes her? 21:56, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try... I don't know if I can find one, though. 01:42, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

I added one about Dustpelt's reaction to her death. I guess it's ok since it shows how others liked the character. 01:51, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand Moonrise, it seems a bit short. 08:21, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

She died in Moonrise, so there isn't anything to add. I added a few more sentences, though. 19:44, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I know she died quite early, but I think you could find some way to expand it, especially Twilight's section. <span style="color:red;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:blue;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Mintstar  Tick tock, the arena is a clock.  19:55, June 12, 2011 (UTC)I

I only added one sentence. I did a search in the book for Larchkit and there was only one result where she was mentioned. The other books are quite similar, with only one or two references. 20:57, June 12, 2011 (UTC)