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Conekit (Ki) ~ For Approval
This turned out better than I thought. 20:30, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Define the shading, smooth it out, define the shading depth, smudge the patches, smudge the ear pink. 20:38, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Is your light from <-- way? I don't want to be super picky with source and all, but the tail contradicts the light source. Light's from <-- way but the shading shows that it's not, and I think the tail shading should be swapped to the other side.

Reuploaded Thanks! And yes, the shading is from the <--- way. 20:49, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry to persist, but if the shading's from <-- way like you say, wouldn't the shading for the tail be moved to the other side? The way it is now, it contradicts the light source, as just that part says that the light is hitting from the other direction while the rest of it does not.

What? Now I'm confused. You just told me to move it to the other side earlier, and I did. Now are you telling me to move it back? Not meaning to sound rude, but which way does it go? 20:54, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

It's correct now. I was looking at your past upload. The upload history shows that you uploaded twice after your original post, and at the time I commented for the second time, your older revision was still showing. So, sorry about that, as I looked at it when it was uploaded for the second revision, after you commented, but before the change had been made.

Well done :) Second image since the first was approved :) Smooth out the shading on the head near the <--- ear? 21:18, 4/24/2017

Reuploaded Thanks! :) 21:25, April 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge out the patches more.

Reuploaded 22:52, April 25, 2017 (UTC)

blur/smudge earpink some more.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  06:08, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Blur shadow on tail – 09:47, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:50, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, it looks really flat. User:Homosneksual/sig 00:43, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:55, April 28, 2017 (UTC)

The way you smoothed the patches looks blotchy. Make sure there are defined spaces between them, and that one side of a patch isn't more blurry than the other, if that makes sense? 23:40, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:05, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

I believe the shading is leaking away from <-- cheek fluff and could you smooth out the ankle markings and face shading please

Reuploaded 04:11, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste all around the head. Also, the shading seems quite blotchy and disconnected, and that it blends into the gray patches so it looks like one big gray patch. 20:44, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:21, May 1, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Shading depth was bad so I changed that. Also, before anyone asks, this if supposed to be sharp. 00:24, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs a lil more 00:30, 5/04/2017

Reuploaded 00:37, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a tad on the back paw, define the shading depth on the head 02:28, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:03, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Shading could stand to be smoothed more on the chest area and head 21:11, 5/05/2017

Reuploaded 22:26, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

I think shading is leaking a little on the back paw and by the underbelly. Also smooth out the shading more where I pointed out last time as well as the tail 14:31, 5/06/2017

Reuploaded 16:08, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

It's still kind of leaking on the back paw, like by the puff of fur 15:59, 5/07/2017

Reuploaded Did I get it? 16:09, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth head shading a bit?

Reuploaded 20:32, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the chest shading just a tiny bit more 22:52, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded 23:37, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (Rogue) ~ For Approval
very filthy repost, I apologize if I break a rule or anything for this --

Not sure if you are or not, but if not, smooth the shading and define the light. 04:48, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

You aren't breaking a rule, Neon. We do not tell users they cannot repost unless they break the one month rule.

Define the ear pink? 20:20, April 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried lightening it to contrast against his black fur, so it'd pop out and be more visible --

Does the ear pink match the other images? The pink in the deputy looks lighter than this. 14:56, April 30, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the image?

Reuploaded I think it's the light? Also, how do I define it, Spooky? I forgot. --

I don't know how other people do it, but I just erase shading where I want my light-source to be with low opacity set in the eraser, then I smudge/blur it. That might work? -- 20:44, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded did it work??? --

Smooth the shading on the tail? 21:12, 5/05/2017

Reuploaded --

Smoothen out all the shading, but especially on the head. 06:17, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded --

There's a speck of waste by the booty 12:55, 5/08/2017

Stoneclaw(A) ~ For Approval
Tonypaw (talk)

The image isn't there. 02:50, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

think i got itTonypaw (talk) 02:53, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest and behind the front leg a bit. Not bad at all. 02:54, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste between the two whiskers on the left side of the face, our left. 02:56, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

done i hopeTonypaw (talk) 03:02, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Is this your first image? It's really good! Anyways, perhaps define the eye depth and add shading onto the <--- ear pink. 03:23, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

thank uTonypaw (talk) 03:28, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

The eyes look more green than amber. --PyroNacht (talk) 03:33, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

i colorpicked from the star, but i changed it anywaysTonypaw (talk) 03:40, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

You reserved the kit image, not apprentice

whoopsTonypaw (talk) 04:12, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

This looks really great so I'm moving it to 'For Approval'. I didn't see you in the project list, but if you decided to join later, you'd be ranked as an apprentice now.

Your resevervation is still for the kit, not the apprentice. 22:42, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

fixed my goodness also why is my name redTonypaw (talk) 23:47, May 2, 2017 (UTC)

Your name is red, because you don't have a userpage. As for the image, add shading to the chest by the leg, as in this source there wouldn't be any light there, and define the shading depth 23:59, 5/02/2017

im not going to add any, as i was going through the archives, jayce said people didn't have to add shading there but i will define the shading depth--Tonypaw (talk) 00:02, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

done--Tonypaw (talk) 00:10, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the leg shading on the closest back leg? Not the haunch, just the leg & paw. Also, smooth the belly, chest, and neck shading. 00:15, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

think i got it im just not gonna be here for a while im going out--Tonypaw (talk) 00:33, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Add some shading at the base of the tail? 04:06, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the face shading leaking onto the <-- ear? --  20:41, May 3, 2017 (UTC) nvm

Can you add more shading on the < earpink 19:55, 5/06/2017

Still working?

Grasskit (CP) (Star) - For Approval
I actually really like this a lot. It also took longer than I expected, but thanks for the file Skt~ Also sorry for lack of PCA work, I've been playing Zelda alot lol 00:51, 5/03/2017

Are his eyes yellow or green? If they're green, they look a bit like yellow-green, unless my eyes are tricking me again 00:58, 5/03/2017

They're the exact same color as the other Star image <span style="">00:59, 5/03/2017

The stripes and paler parts seem smoother on the kit image. 00:59, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

The kit eyes seem a bit more greener than this one. And Snek, that might be because of the shading or such <span style="">01:00, 5/03/2017

Oh my god, sorry. I didn't pay attention. His eyes are yellow xD Sorry! <span style="">01:03, 5/03/2017

Yeah I had fun with the shading, the stripes and paler parts are actually a lot smoother underneath :P <span style="">01:08, 5/03/2017

There's one teensy tiny speck of waste near the tail. This is awesome! (Windwaker's pretty cool, if you've played that one yet.) 01:16, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've never ever ever had waste, so I'm pretty sure there was nothing there but meh :P Also, no actually. Breath of the Wild is the very first Zelda game I've ever played, believe it or not lol <span style="">01:22, 5/03/2017

There's a first for everything...define light on tail? (I've never played Zelda but I've read a manga-type book that my friend let me borrow)

The stripes seem a lot softer and less smudged on the kit. 02:49, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

@winter, ive already explained why it looks rough above, its because of the shadong, but ill get to starlights comment in a few hours (at work) <span style="">16:43, 5/03/2017

Reuploaded i ended up smoothing the stripes a tiny bit anyway <span style="">00:24, 5/04/2017

I know you are not obligated to do this, but I wanted to put it out there. I designed this pattern off of my cat that unfortunately, died recently, and he had stripes on his back and that's what I intended when I did my original image ;; like I said, you don't have to, and if not I'll try to snag another brown tabby in the future  01:23, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Breath of the Wild is addictive, I feel ur pain brah. Anyways, I think the back looks a bit grainy and greenish, can you blend it so it looks more brown? --

Hey Ivy, you mind telling me where youd like the stripes? If not ill just put em somewhere. And @neon, thats actually part of the pattern <span style="">19:40, 5/04/2017

Here's an old picture, thank you so much http://90scat.deviantart.com/art/I-Iz-Perchin-Kat-123384145  21:50, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the back stripes a little paler too just to match a little better with your kitty <3 sorry for your loss, they're a gorgeous cat. Lemme know if I need to change anything else :D <span style="">00:40, 5/05/2017

There's waste outside the chest. Smoothen out the shading on the pale part of the chest. And smoothen out the small patch of pale part on the elbow a bit. 02:10, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Winter theres legit no waste. Maybe check for specks on your screen? I never have waste. Ill get to the rest tomorrow <span style="">03:02, 5/05/2017

Is that waste? http://vvcap.com/img/AsGfshnbZ2r.png That light brown dot? 03:09, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can you try circling it in red next time? I spent like 10 minutes trying to find it. ;; Also my shading style is supposed to be sharp-ish, so I only smoothed it a little <span style="">11:53, 5/05/2017

CBA?

Could you try and smooth out the shading a little bit more? It really doesn't look like it matches the kit at all with how your shading is; I also am having such a rough time telling what's part of the pattern and what's shading. I get you like sharper shading and all, but when it starts to alter the pattern to the point I can't tell what's what, then I think a tweak is necessary.

Reuploaded <span style="">15:50, 5/07/2017

Loki (Ro) - For Evaluation
I hope this is okay. It is my first attempt at a black cat.Streamdapple (talk) 11:26, May 3, 2017 (UTC)Streamdapple

Try not to align your image please Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:06, May 3, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Align the image? What does that mean?--Streamdapple (talk) 20:31, May 3, 2017 (UTC)Streamdapple

This needs renamed to File:Loki.rogue.png —  Minkclaw   13:13, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Your shading, I don't know if its me, seems a bit all over the place. I can't tell where your light source is coming from and nit needs smudged quite a bit. —  Minkclaw   13:14, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

Here are the hex codes from the kittypet('cause I'm the OA of it, and I have the exact colors) Fur:1a1a1a Eyes:9cff00 Earpink:ab4538 (Shading tint is optional but here anyways:6f4dff <span style="">15:53, 5/03/2017

Renamed. Please use File:Loki.rogue.png to reupload from here on out.

Still working? <span style="">16:01, 5/07/2017

Rushtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
Wut have I done? I've gone insane from my mom listening to Beauty and the Beast (It's good but I just want to drown it out with Castle on the Hill cause that's how I like it)

Lighten the shading a bit Rainbowmistake (talk) 00:04, May 4, 2017 (UTC)chat

Can you smooth out the shading a little also? 00:06, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

I can't really see the pupil <span style="">00:19, 5/04/2017

re-up I might just go for a sharp shading style if this doesn't work out. I'm not sure about the pupil because I'm worried about it turning cross-eyed. I'll define it later though.

The base color looks a little too light, and I think the earpink in <-- ear should be lighter since the earpink on the elder image is in shadow, and this ear is not

The tail shading is looking too... little? But anyways just expand it.

I colorpicked...did the elder's OA use highlights? Also what color should I make the earpink?

Can you smooth the shading —  Minkclaw   19:23, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

re-up "I'm on my way..."

Define the light on the tail 22:38, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I'm not exactly happy with this.

Define the pupils a bit, they're sorta hidden by the highlights. 03:23, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail tip and near the base of the tail, smooth the shading some more on the flank and the < leg where it kinda looks too defined? And define the shading depth a little <span style="">21:17, 5/05/2017

re-up Stupid tail shading....I'm going to get to the eyes later.

re-up

There's an unfilled pixel on the <--- paw. 06:15, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail again where I asked earlier. I didn't see any change towards the base of the tail <span style="">16:01, 5/07/2017

re-up It's kinda hard.

I meant the very top where the tail shading is on the very left side of the tail should be light. And define it more on the tail-tip too <span style="">16:17, 5/07/2017

re-up I don't think this did any good, but oh well.

Sorry for comment spamming, but this is too dark to match the elder image. I've provided you with a screenshot and to the right you see the colors I've colorpicked from the lightest parts of the images. The lighter one is what the base should be on this image. <span style="">16:22, 5/07/2017

And it also looks like there's some shading that needs to be smoothed by the < leg's shoulder line <span style="">16:22, 5/07/2017

re-up I'll get to the shading smoothing later. (you're fine snow don't worry ^^)

re-up

Don't forget about the eye comment :P <span style="">12:56, 5/08/2017

What eye comment?

"I can't really see the pupil—Broken_Foot♣Ra Ra Rasputin♣ 00:19, 5/04/2017" & "Define the pupils a bit, they're sorta hidden by the highlights. Dannydismal 03:23, May 5, 2017 (UTC)" <span style="">00:49, 5/09/2017

Strong Pounce (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay let's try this again shall we? —  Minkclaw   13:28, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the front leg farthest from us? Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:37, May 4, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Re-Ups —  Minkclaw   19:17, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little, and expand the light on the chest. 20:44, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

There is waste on the right side of the image and by the paws. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light to < front leg <span style="">14:32, 5/06/2017

Define the tail shading 14:39, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any earpink?

Still working? <span style="">22:53, 5/08/2017

Wildkit (RC) (Kit) ~ For Evaluation
Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:47, May 5, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Reups: Changed the file name, smoothed the shading and added another patch Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:29, May 4, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Smooth the shading a lot more. Also don't change the file name. It just makes it harder for admins to find and delete the old file. <span style="">14:45, 5/04/2017

Define the ear pink a bit? 14:47, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Reups: You can delete Wildkit the old one Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:49, May 4, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Can you spread out the shading, smudge/blur the ear pink, and define the eyes some. —  Minkclaw   15:51, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

This looks a little too blue, maybe make it a tad more grayish to make it look more realistic? 17:42, May 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe try using #576970 or #4c5e65, the second one might be too dark —  Minkclaw   19:22, May 4, 2017 (UTC) I will also rid waste Rainbowmistake (talk) 21:31, May 4, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smooth out shading a lot more KatsCandy (talk) 08:40, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is very flat. --

Kats, do not repeat comments <span style="">11:18, 5/05/2017

Ill upload in an hour, I'm actually very proud of this :p and thanky for the hex codesRainbowmistake (talk) 13:08, May 5, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Reups: Can someone get rid of the white background for me please? Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:45, May 5, 2017 (UTC)Chat

What program are you using? I know how to remove the white background in GIMP so I could explain how if that's what you're using. Also smooth the shading. 15:21, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Ill upload on mon, and i figured it out, i use pixlr Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:57, May 5, 2017 (UTC)chat

Also how to snooth out shading? Rainbowmistake (talk) 02:19, May 6, 2017 (UTC)chat

To smooth out shading, you can set the blur tool at rate 100 and check the hard edge box or move the hard edge scale all the way up. (Broken told me that. :P) It really works! 02:53, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Oki, thanks Rainbowmistake (talk) 03:52, May 6, 2017 (UTC)chat

Is it okay if I turn this transparent? I wouldn't do anything else to it, just download it, throw it into GIMP, and transparent it? Also it doesn't seem you've added depth. You can create another layer, and go over the especially darker parts of the shading to give depth. --

If you want to, I'd really appreciate it Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:17, May 6, 2017 (UTC)chat

No neon, this is rainbows image. Rainbow all you have to do to get rid of the white background is use your wand selection tool in pixlr, select your lineart layer, and then select the areas around the lineart, but not inside. Then press delete, or erase the areas that are highlighted, and then press ctrl+d to deselect <span style="">13:18, 5/06/2017

Ok, I did figure it out after a while Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:23, May 6, 2017 (UTC)chat

It's still white. --

I can't upload until Mon Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:19, May 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

any more comments? Im uploading soon Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:39, May 8, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Reups: I tried Rainbowmistake (talk) 15:26, May 8, 2017 (UTC)Chat

Hey Rainbow, don't change the timestamp of your original post when reuploading, because leads use that when we decline for the one month limit. I changed it back. Other than that, add shading on the --> front leg.

Could you also smooth out shading and define shading depth?

I did a 2 second reups thats why it got messed up Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:57, May 8, 2017 (UTC)chat

Also, I have to no way to get rid of that waste Rainbowmistake (talk) 21:03, May 8, 2017 (UTC)chat

You can use the eraser tool. I'm sure that it's on every program. 22:28, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a lot more <span style="">22:54, 5/08/2017

Stoneclaw (W) ~ For Approval
I guess now we'll never know who their parents were. :( 03:00, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the patch of shading depth on the back a little <span style="">21:20, 5/05/2017

Deerpaw (TC) (Star)- For evaluation
KatsCandy (talk) 08:37, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

My first helpful hint is to not align your images - as it can mess with the page's formatting. Second, this should be called File:Deerpaw (TC).star.png and there is a fair bit of waste around the image. I would also perhaps recommend getting in contact with the artist of the image you are matching for the file so that everything can match spot on. ^^ 08:41 Fri May 5 2017

Can you clear backround? – 10:15, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the spots, also can you add around Deerpaw (TC) so we can get a link to her page? --

She is long-furred, like charart of appretince – 11:00, May 5, 2017 (UTC)

Hey yeah I'm the OA of the apprentice. I used pure white speckles and smudged each slightly, and there's also texture on the other image. The earpink seems off in color, and also, define the eye depth a tad. If you need the file for it, shoot a message on my talk page

Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. <span style="">21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink <span style="">01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray <span style="">16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt W.) ~ For Approval
how does one charart 21:12, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the texture a lit'l, and soften the white?

I think the shading is leaking by the belly on the curve of the hind leg <span style="">16:04, 5/07/2017

reuploaded the homework is threatening to drown me why did i leave it until now 23:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white patches? 23:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:23, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

It wouldn't hurt to brighten the patches more (try removing the brown on it), and give them a good blur/smudge, they look a little chalky.

Slate (W) ~ For Approval
One of my favorite characters in the entire series. All colors from other images. Comment? 01:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Eyelashes <span style="">01:32, 5/07/2017

Reuploaded. This is what happens when you use older images made just for fun as a base for an official image. 01:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Is the scar supposed to go on her underbelly too? Because I see it on the belly <span style="">16:05, 5/07/2017

I'm dumb, nvm. But define the light on the legs? <span style="">16:05, 5/07/2017

Reuploaded. 18:51, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Uhhhh....eyelashes again? 18:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Woops. Not sure how that happened. 18:56, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs, and I think there's leaking shading on the back leg closest to us near where the paw meets the ground <span style="">22:56, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded. 23:43, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Quick Water (W) ~ CBA
school trip tmr :( try and throw all of your comments before i leave tomorrow! (i wont be here for a week or so)

Define the texture on the white marking on the head 02:54, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

the white on the head is supposed to be two parts. one on the bridge of the nose and the other the forehead. te mark also isn't that big on her other images, it's more of an oval shapeand should only go to around to near the top of her head at the end point. also shrink the white on the hind leg, there's a little too much of it. 03:42, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded did i get it all?

yup. I'd reduce the white on the leg just a little bit more, but that's preference, not going to hold you to it. 04:08, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The bend in the hind leg should have white. 04:19, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded is this what you all meant?

Can you smooth out the earpink a tiny bit where it meets the base of the ear? It's looking a little too defined <span style="">16:10, 5/07/2017

Re-uploaded well i wish you could've commented earlier. but thankfully i didn't leave yet

CBA? <span style="">12:58, 5/08/2017

Night (D) - CBA


doesnt she have a black chin?

Re-uploaded. That wasn't shading? Whoops. I was using the loner as the base, since it's the first in the set.

Re-uploaded. White tweak + shading modification.

Can you possibly define the shading on the head/neck area as well as the tail? I might just be blind on the tail part, but lol <span style="">16:11, 5/07/2017

Re-uploaded.

CBA? <span style="">12:59, 5/08/2017

Holly (W) ~ CBA
02:49, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Please don't shoot me for another shading comment but can you define it a bit?(sorry if this is nitpicky) Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:22, May 7, 2017 (UTC)chat

reuploaded yr fine. I tried adding slight highlights to the edges of some of the spikes, does it help tell apart the base and shading better? 16:08, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Much floof, such wow. CBA? <span style="">12:59, 5/08/2017

Yew Tail(W) ~ For Approval
So unhappy with the shading, but I happily pounced on this, I love brown and cream cats and I've always wanted to make a Charart of Yew Tail :D Whether he appears alot or not, his design will always be my favorite <3 <span style="">04:01, 5/07/2017

Yew Tail's design is pretty awesome! Maybe define the shading on the back paw closest to us? Very nice. 04:08, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! <span style="">04:19, 5/07/2017

Maybe lighten the shading just a tad? 04:21, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the ear pink a bit?

Re-uploaded! Still very unhappy with this :^/ <span style="">04:37, 5/07/2017

I was hoping to get him once I was done with Slate. His Early Settler has brown ears. Also, I would recommend using tinted shading, as black shading on cream/mostly cream cats tend to look off (brown usually works best, I find). Would you like the file for his Early Settler image? 05:10, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Sure. I might use red or yellowish shading tint, but I don't know. I can't seem to smooth it out correctly, and do the basics. I might have art block sadly :/ Here's my email: hannahtiger2003@gmail.com <span style="">05:24, 5/07/2017

Re-uploaded! I decided not to change the tint. Shading tint is my choice, but I kept it black. I made the ears brown though. <span style="">07:29, 5/07/2017

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us, and possibly recede the shading a little bit on the shoulder/chest area? <span style="">16:12, 5/07/2017

Re-uploaded! <span style="">16:50, 5/07/2017

Re-uploaded! Finally got around to not being lazy <span style="">06:00, 5/08/2017

Define the shading on the leg again please <span style="">13:02, 5/08/2017

Re-uploaded! Will fix leaking shading in a moment <span style="">16:27, 5/08/2017

Re-uploaded! <span style="">17:30, 5/08/2017

Just a teeeeny bit more on the very tip of the toes, I don't see any shading there. Also looks like there's leaking shading on the same leg <span style="">22:57, 5/08/2017

Re-uploaded! I changed the shading to brown, and I like it a lot more now :) <span style="">00:09, 5/09/2017

The shading looks a little odd by the haunch where it connects to the leg. It's like a little jagged? <span style="">00:48, 5/09/2017

Recede the shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 00:52, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Rainbow you need to start defining where you're asking them to do things, because it's kinda confusing. <span style="">00:54, 5/09/2017

Re-uploaded! If you mean recede the shading on the shoulder, no. I've used the same shading amount on Mossleaf's warrior, and I was not told to recede anything. This is valid as is. <span style="">01:11, 5/09/2017

Smooth the neck shading a little bit? This is looking great! 01:24, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! Thank you! This was a bit of a hassle to upload. Something was going wrong with my file, but I got it <span style="">01:39, 5/09/2017

White Tail (W) ~ For Approval
Not totally sure about the white placement but I'm too tired to care right now. 06:47, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the tail and front legs a tad? 16:35, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 19:50, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I think there should be white on the back paw farthest from us since there is some there on the early settler image. 20:23, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I figured there wouldn't be any there because of the angle but I added the tiniest bit. 22:28, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the closest back paw a tiny bit more? <span style="">22:57, 5/08/2017

Reups 23:20, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Talonpaw (A) - For Approval
Here we go! --Mustetassu (talk) 09:47, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

This is very good for a first image! This isn't reserved on the table though, so that might be a problem <span style="">09:49, 5/07/2017

Ah, I'm sorry! This is my first time doing this so I'm still learning :') Should I reserve it now or is it too late for that? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 09:55, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Yes, from my knowledge, everyone gets one free pass :)

Alright, I reserved it now! Thanks for the help! :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 10:15, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

i don't think you did, your name's not on the table.

Soften the stripes? I'm so tired I can barely see properly, but expand thr shadng too? The place where you reserve stuff is called http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki:Charart ...I'm gping to sleep now.. <span style="">11:10, 5/07/2017

Aaaa I'm so sorry, I misunderstood! ;___; Now my name is in there. I edited earlier this (http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki:Charart/List) page where I stroke Talonpaw's file from the list. Did I do wrong, or was that meant to be done as well? I'm sorry for messing up like this ;w;' --Official HamilTrash (talk) 11:13, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Silver tabbies should have black stripes; that's what we've done for those who are called just silver, which applies in this case.

Re-uploaded. How does it look now? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 11:35, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

This should be File:Talonpaw.apprentice.png not Apprentice. Can you define the shading depth? <span style="">13:10, 5/07/2017

if it's possible, can you define the white paws? this is nice. 16:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I added the changes requested above, how is it now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:10, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Removed alignment. Don't put "|left" Just click on the photo and hit "more info" and then click on "upload new version" <span style="">17:13, 5/07/2017

Smoothen out the white paws into the silver and maybe make the earpink less neon, and smoothen it out too? 17:17, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth 17:21, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Got it, thanks for the tip Broken_Foot! I added the requested changes above, it was a bit difficult to define the eye depth when the apprentice's eyes are so small but I tried my best. How is it now? --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:28, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I don't see changes for the earpink and white paws. Smoothen out the white paws a bit more, and all of the shading. 17:30, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Your welcome :) The image is coming along great! Here's some earpink codes that you might like: 9a3b3b\b28891\e1a7a7 <span style="">17:34, 5/07/2017

Re-uploaded. How is it now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 17:36, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe darken the silver a bit to make it more clear that the front paws are white? Right now they look like the same color as the rest of the kitty

Re-uploaded. I darkened the silver a bit, how does it look now? :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 03:30, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you make the nose pink less purple-ish? 03:45, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changed it! :) --Official HamilTrash (talk) 03:53, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Can you expand the shading on the legs, shoulder, and tail areas? It seems like there's too little <span style="">13:04, 5/08/2017

Imo, I think the stripes look more dark gray than black. I keep looking at Shiningheart, Reed Tail, and other silver tabbies and the stripes here don't look dark enough to be black. Darken them more? 16:58, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

I think this is the range of images that the shading tint makes it look a completely different color that throws off the image, and this seems to be the case. I know shading tint is artists choice but can you make it something other than a light blue? <span style="">18:34, 5/08/2017

I don't see how it's throwing it off at all. if anything the base just needs to be lightened a bit more, since it looks a bit more pale grey than silver. 18:39, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

To me with the shading it kinda looks like a pale blue gray color <span style="">20:39, 5/08/2017

Gonna have to agree with Snow on this one^ It does seem like it's pale blue <span style="">01:26, 5/09/2017

Birch (W) - CBA
14:46, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the white around his eye? 15:23, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is this any better? 15:55, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Minor thing, can you add stripes onto the back paws? On the ES image, I think there's a stripe on em, if that makes sense? 17:12, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I added one to (his) right paw, but not to his left one. On the ES image, there is no stripe over his left paw that far down. In addition, his left paw is also visible on the kit (which is first in the set) and I'm nearly positive that there's no stripe over it on that, either. 17:26, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink a tad?

Re-uploaded. 20:12, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Your images never cease to amaze me, Ivy. CBA? <span style="">22:58, 5/08/2017

Leaf (DTC) (W) - For Approval
Love him so much :^) Hopefully I can get Pink Eyes after this one. 17:10, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Nice job on this! There's waste all around the ears. 17:14, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you! I believe it's gone now. 17:17, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Idk if it's just me, but the base seems really dark and I can't make out any shading on the black. 17:19, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I figured this would come up. Okay so, I can't change the base as it's colorpicked from an unshaded, perfectly solid spot on the rogue image, and the shading is hard to see on there too. I don't know how to fix it. 17:22, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Idk if it's just my screen being weird, but the white seems to be looking a bit gray. 17:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

reups changed light source. Not as much shading hits the white now, so hopefully it looks brighter. 17:44, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth shading on tail and -> back leg a bit

reups 02:36, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Your source would have some light on the top of the frontmost visible paw. It looks like the shading from the back paw is leaking onto the front one.

reups same deal was going on w/ the back paws 11:19, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the frontmost closest paw again? on the white. And also smooth the shading on the back paws <span style="">13:05, 5/08/2017

reups 20:42, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Whiskers (K) ~ For Approval


Smooth out the shading on the tail-tip? Very ncie! The brown looks green so much, but the kittypet is the same, so I don't think you'd want to change it <span style="">17:50, 5/07/2017

Reuploaded Yeah, don't really want to change it, because it matches the KP, and I also had to shift it further than I liked for the KP anyway to avoid it being less green which is still something weird because my monitor doesn't display it as green somehow;

It's like a brownish-green to me. Define the light on the back paw a little? <span style="">13:07, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded

Can you define the shading a little in between the front leggys? <span style="">23:00, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded

Drizzle (W) ~ For Approval
I may need to define texture

Yeah, you probalby should. Also,smudge the gray some more. 23:34, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded tomorrow I'll try to make earpink match better

Would you like the file for the kit? <span style="">03:15, 5/08/2017

Some things: the white that is in that stripe down the middle should widen out as ii goes --> way a little more, like on the kit image. It should also be a little wider in proportion on the leg part as well, because of how wide it seems on the ES, and the kit blank is pretty small so it would account to that. The ES image (I'm fairly sure) shows 4 white paws. The second gray stripe on the tail shouldn't go all the way across - as seen on both other images, and also, I think the white chest dips down a teensy bit too dar. Then, the facial white has a bit more of a defined shape - and it'd stretch in a thinner part a few more pixels on the forehead, like the others. Also you might want to double check if there can be those three white spots as shown on the lower half of the body. Ik it's from differing angles, but the one nearer to the leg wouldn't because of the ES, and the one <-- way isn't visible on the kit, unless it's hidden by shading, idk. Sorry for the long comment

Also the white and the texture should be a lot smoother to match the kit, as it was the first in the set. Also define the texture on the white. <span style="">12:48, 5/08/2017

Reuploaded Alrighty so I widened the white on the front leg and flank, fixed the tail, I tried to define the shape of the white on the face, receded white chest a bit, smoothed white and texture, now the things I have issues with: So about the back paws, I didn't make them white because on the Early Settler it's showing the other sides of the paws and they aren't solid white, they just have little white spots, I didn't want to stretch the white on the forehead because on the kit it barely shows it going above the eyes. Then the white spots I added, I don't think any of the spots I added are visible on the kit or the Early Settler, but the kit blank is tiny and weird so maybe I'm wrong. I'll define texture on the white later, after I get the file

The back paw closest to us gets white on it, according to the kit image. <span style="">20:49, 5/08/2017

Also in regards to the es image, it looks like the oa has white on both paws, but it doesnt look like the whole paw because of the leg shading on the other leg. So in that case, white is needed on both paws <span style="">20:51, 5/08/2017

Seedpelt (MV) (Star) ~ For Approval
ErmineGlow (talk) 00:02, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups got rid of some waste. ErmineGlow (talk) 00:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and define the shading depth some. 00:14, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth 00:36, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle shading. 01:13, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the tail, and it looks like you erased some of the lineart around the whiskers, paws, chin, and tail

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 02:41, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more. It should be more of a gradient. 11:14, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

You have very odd smudges in your shading that conflict with the pattern, mind fixing that? <span style="">12:49, 5/08/2017

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:02, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups For some reason the changes to the shading didn't appear, so I tried again. Me thinks it is better now. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:05, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">21:06, 5/08/2017

Reups Me terrible at shading. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:45, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a lot 21:52, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Ermine, what tool are you using for smoothing the shading? Because it kind of looks like the burn tool, and that's not a good tool to use. If you have a watercolor tool, I'd advise using that, or a blur tool in general. Are you using a mouse or a tablet? <span style="">23:03, 5/08/2017

Bubbling Stream (W) - For Approval
She looks so much better with the ES blank :| All layers/colors from the other images. <span style="">00:18 Mon May 8

Can you smooth out that one spot on the tail tip? (unless you'd rather not because it's part of your style)

Define the ear pink 02:33, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Looks like the yellow is a little darker than on the Early Settler

Sun got the colors from the other images though? Given that she's also the OA of the kit and early settler, I would think that Sun got the colors directly from the other files. (not the alt, the regular ES)

Everything matches perfectly though? I cannot mess with the ear pink. This is the exact color and way it was smudged as the other images. And even the opacity on all the layers is the exact same, so there is no difference. The only difference is light source. <span style="">12:45 Mon May 8

Can you smooth the shading a little tiny bit on the legs/paws? <span style="">13:08, 5/08/2017

Jagged Peak (W) - For Approval
all colors from his other images. i love jagged peak. 23:44, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paws Rainbowmistake (talk) 00:41, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

they don't really need light? his body would probably block out any. 00:47, May 9, 2017 (UTC)