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Onestar (Warrior Alt) - For Evaluation
Im not very sure if this can be made but I saw it under the characters that need art. I tried to make it as similar as possible.

Sorry if I did make a mistake of making this, im very new to the project so here it is... Kezii (talk) 01:43, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

By the way I also used FireAlpaca if there needs to be changes. Kezii (talk) 01:45, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Welcome to the project! You are able to make this i believe, but since this is your first Chaart, this is for Evaluation I'm pretty sure, Don't thumb your images or align them (|thumb) (|left or |right), Put the image before any flavor text you wanna put along with it! This should be named File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png aswell. The < eye is looking a bit gray, and shading could be defined. Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 02:03, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I have the leader file from when I was doing this, I can email if you want?  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:56, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink. 13:37, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I tried all the suggestions, fixed gray eyes, and added ear fur (to make it more similar to the alt leader) Kezii (talk) 23:14, May 29, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into source mode and remove the |thumb. Also avoid thumbing by going to the file and click "Upload a new version of this file". You need to upload this as File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png, or the image won't work with the wiki's templates. The lineart also appears to be missing in some places, namely the ears and paws. Brighten up the white on both paws, and define the shading everywhere on the white. Can you also smooth out the chest shading? 00:29, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

The texture, I believe, looks a little rough. Could you smooth it out?

The hind paws should be white too, and I think the hind paw furthest from us is hidden? It should be visible. 01:14, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Oh, and I use firealpaca too so if you have any specific questions, let me know :) 01:21, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could also afford some smoothing on the hind leg closest to us. 20:55, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

idk if it’s just my phone screen, but there appears to be red around the lineart? some of it seems to be on the lineart

yeah, the colors seem to be leaking out of the lineart, and the lineart itself is red/blurred in some places. 13:33 Sat Jun 1

idk if this has been said already so sorry if it has, but some of the lineart appears to be missing. 12:58, 6/02/2019

You still have plenty of time left, but are you still working? 01:54, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Cloversplash (W) - For Approval
Comments? I love that clover leaf. 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

She's dark brown, I'm v sure the splash should be clover shaped. It should probably match what the old one shows.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading needs to be smoothed out around the chest/legs and there is a bit of waste by the tail 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It says shaped like a clover leaf, not a clover itself. I'll fix the base and shading tomorrow *decides to steal Loudbellys coloring*. 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

a clover leaf is a clover lmfao, either way it should resemble the shape of a clover. Shouldn't the coloring match the old one???  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with mink :/

04:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't the clover technically the whole plant, and then a clover leaf is an individual leaf? I'm not sure, but Potato might have a point. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

no, lmao. the shape on the muzzle doesn't even resemble clover leaf, I said that this should match the colors and design of the old one <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:59, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I know what you were saying, I was only arguing about the "clover leaf isn't a full clover" thing. Anywho, Potato I think there's waste on the actual lineart of the tail, as well as near it like Ty pointed out. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  05:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

didnt we aree that all iamges should match the old one or whatever 12:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

If that's true, I'm fixing it right now. 13:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded So I googled a clover leaf and what I got was a full clover, so I matched it to best of my ability. 13:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to be the unpopular one here, but I think Potato and Jose were actually correct. It should be one of the leaves, not the entire plant. It explicitly says "a clover leaf", and if you look it up... you get things like a three or four leaf clover, meaning that a "clover leaf" is singular. You were correct in your statements, Potato and Jose. Please go and change the marking back to how you had it, but perhaps shrink it just a little bit. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded  16:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

It says that the white flash is on her nose, and this looks like it's on her forehead. Could you move it down so it touches the top of the nose? Also, can you curve the haunch shading to match its shape? 16:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the shape wider and kind of heart shaped. These are clover leaves for reference. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded me tries  16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

You could do something like this maybe. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:48, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded arghhh  19:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you also define the ear pink? i cant really see it espeically on the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There should be light on the legs with this source <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:16, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The source is fine- this was used on two other images. See below. 13:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

While this source has been used, those other images have a lot more depth on the front legs so they're not all flat; if you could do that some, that'd be great.

Reuploaded  23:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The shading appears very blotchy on the haunch. Could you please smooth it, along with on the front leg closest to us? 23:25, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate the haunch shading  00:28, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail - just a little bit, and maybe extend the shading on the back leg so it reaches <<- that way more? This looks amazing, Potato!

Reuploaded thanks! 00:43, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on both legs and the tail could stand to be smoothed more. There's also waste by <- that ear. 14:18, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:13, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the depth of the eye color and smooth the haunch shading

Reuploaded *internally screams at haunch shading*  01:35, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the light on the legs, or fix the way it transitions from the top. It seems abrupt to cover the whole legs instead of equally transitioning. So maybe smoothen the top part up and add just a tad of light to them <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:23, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't want to define the light on the front leg farthest from us much more or the chest shading is going to look weird. 22:26, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar (W) ~ For Approval
I'm still experimenting on the tint, the shading is sposed to look like it does btw <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups here we go <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading?

Also, looking at the leader, there should be at least a scar on this side.

Looking at the old warrior, he didn't get his scars til he was a deputy? I asked about that before I started and I was told he didn't have them during this time <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:38, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I also went to check his page for the cites of the scars but he doesn't have them?? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm unless a cite pops, it's fine as is. But, the haunch shading does need to be receded here, the source doesn't call for this much.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:00, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading on the flank and top of the haunch? There's also a spot of shading on the top part of the tail, almost near the tip, which I don't think would be there? 23:30, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, you wouldn't need shading on the top of the shoulder like what you've got. Just remove the top bit, 'cause if you leave the rest, it will still make sense to show there's a shoulder there.

Re-Ups, I'd much rather keep the shoulder part as I have the same source on my others. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:10, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

i forgot the leaking tail shading, ill reup that soon <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:11, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

I might redo the shading as I'm not overlu happy with it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:06, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I fixed the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:35, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

I concur with Max on the shoulder bit; due to the image being white, shading is a lot more visible, so here with the source, it shouldn't form a shoulder top when the light's right at it.

Bluebellkit (K) - For Approval
I think I did very well with my first white cat. Comments? 13:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

blur the shading along the tail near the point? <span style="">14:48 Sat Jun 1

Reuploaded  15:53, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Same thing as Blackstar. 22:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

is it possible to curve the shoulder shading some more? it looks odd with it just being a straight line. 22:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, its really rough <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Remove waste and define the light on the tail

Reuploaded  00:03, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 02:15, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to break CBA, but I still see several issues apparent. The shading is leaking away from the lineart slightly on the haunch, and I believe that back paw that's visible would have the barest touch of light, since it's the shorthair blank, it's showing enough for there to be some. The shading on the face shouldn't go quite so far up the muzzle, and should connect > way along the jawbone, and wrap upside the head to cover the back of the head's tufts of fur. The shoulder shading is still in that awkward spot mentioned by skt earlier; I believe that could be removed entirely. The shading depth should be defined on the visible front paw/lower leg area, and there's shading leaking from the arm onto the < side of the haunch, which shouldn't be there.

Reuploaded redid the shading, this looks much better. 22:18, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Same thing with Blackstar, and I think there's an odd colored patch on <--- side of the haunch. 23:07, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope it's nonexistent now. 23:17, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking in several places. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:07, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:16, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

im still seeing leaking shading on the haunch <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:27, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded it should be gone now. 22:28, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar (K) - For Approval
I don't think the back paw farthest from us would be showing, so I didn't add it. Anywho, comments? 13:52, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the black paws a bit more? 16:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waster, and it looks almost like there's a gap in the haunch shading. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 16:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the gap in the haunch shading is intentional, Baykit's source has the same gap. 16:43, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little overall. 18:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

The black on the hindleg needs to be higher. As his others show it about just about a bit of his ankle wise so both would almost cover his back paws completely.<span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:18, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a patch of shading leaking onto < side of the haunch. 22:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Its leaking on the stomach too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:44, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading

12:24, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:03, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:48, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:27, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Same comments as on Bluebellkit, and also smooth the tail shading

Reuploaded redid shading  22:31, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you taper the <--- end of the haunch shading so it doesn't end in a bulk? 23:06, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:14, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Same as the other <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:19, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the haunch <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
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Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <21:33, 6/01/2019> ​

Smooth out the haunch shading a bit? 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

honestly it could be smoothed out everywhere

Could you curve the shoulder shading up onto the shoulder. Right now it seems like it stops abruptly there and kinda throws it off a bit. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Beetail (W) ~ For Approval
Let's try this again. Tinystream (talk) 02:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This should match the star and the deputy. The stripes on these seems thinner, rougher, and more bunched up together. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:40, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This actually matches quite well, Mink? Could you possibly define the shading depth on the chest (near the arms)?

The stripes don't seem to cross like this on the others unless my computer screen is showin it too dark. They're also more smudged and rougher looking <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:23, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Mink. The stripes appear rougher and closer together on the other images. 18:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

https://www.ezimba.com/work/190603C/ezimba15349395102400.png here's the unshaded version to help with stripe placement. The colors look good

i think there's a line of waste under the tail... i forgot to remove that too in mine

Reup Sorry it took so long, I've been busy. Tinystream (talk) 14:02, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

can you add more stripes to the tail? and smudge them to match the others in the set? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out? 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out more. It's still very sharp, and the revision history shows only slight changes.

The design was supposed to be sharp, so I'm tryng to smoothbit as much as I can while kesping the shading design. But yeah, ill fix that <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:45, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think if you lighten it just a little more, you can remove some of the sharpness - but Spooky's comment still stands, its still sharp.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:41, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading leaking away from the lineart on the belly, underneath the tail, and on the > back leg. If could nab away waste floating about and add some light to the tail tip as well, that'd be great.

Cloverfoot (K) ~ For Approval
i'm not sure if i should put the heading as for evaluation since i already uploaded something but it got declined rip. i really want to play sa2 <span style="">13:44 Sun Jun 2

You're fine- Spooky moved you to apprentice rank cause a few years ago you were an apprentice. Smooth out the shading? 15:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the stripes could stand to be slightly thickened on the body, and given a slightly rougher more paintbrushy feel, like the loner and rogue

re-ups tried a new brush and repainted the stripes since smudging them didn't really look good. started coming down with a really bad cough yesterday and it turns out im still bad at sa2 so theres that <span style="">13:37 Mon Jun 3

I believe the stripes on the tail could stand to be thicker to match, and overall they could be just a little less sharp

re-ups tried to avoid blurring the stripes as much as possible <span style="">21:06 Tue Jun 4

I think the stripes could still be softened some more. 22:58, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

re-ups this is as soft as i could stand to make them honestly <span style="">15:37 Thu Jun 6

Dragonfly (Ki) ~ For Approval
imaliveiswear

00:49, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a dorsal stripe and I think the stripes are more jagged. 01:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:34, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the dorsal stripe? Im having a hard time making it out, or matbe thicken it some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:25, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Apple Blossom (W) ~ For Approval
okay thats enough cat doodles for tonight

01:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

The colors dont quite seem to match her others. The stripes should be sharper and the design should probably match the style thats going on there, she seems to have side stripes more so on her other side which should probably match this side too in style <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i think you should darken the shading a little :O 18:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Reuploaded 19:35, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

there's a line of waste underneath the tail and the back paw furthest from us doesn't seem to be filled in

Alder (Kit) - For Approval
hi. my naem squidwardo. i draw katz. i believe this is freegame so its time to get revenge on this pattern bc if u didnt know my first charart was one of alders set that got declined. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:50, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add variation to the flecks, and define the gray flecks. 02:51, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the gray flecks tho 04:13, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I do agree, they need defined <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:16, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Would you care for one of the files? I have the hunter, and I think I still have Jayce's old warrior. 14:56, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you thin out the shading and possibly change the tint? It's throwing off the color and making it look extremely different. I know tint is often a choice, but this is making it look very red.

Harrybrook (W) ~ CBA
Ahhh by first every charart. <3 14:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I want to do my first, Brackenfoot, but he's not on the art list so I'm not sure if I'm allowed. Lol anyways, can you smooth out the shading on the stomach/where the haunch meets the stomach just a tad? This is great. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:30, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

reups Thanks! 15:42, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to double-check with the OA of the loner, but I'm not 100% sure he needs the pale parts, since that was a graphic novel cite that was leftover when we only had that description for him. It's possible that was overlooked with his images due to it only being gotten rid of fairly recently.

Alright, I think it's being kept as an aesthetic choice. I went and asked David if they wanted to keep it on the loner, since that was the last remaining image of the set, and I think they're going to just keep it, since a lot of our images have pale parts anyways. Sorry, I just wasn't sure if the pale itself was overlooked on the other images due to the cite removal or not.

It’s all good haha 18:30, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 15:34, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Cinderfur (W) - For Approval


20:41, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth? 02:16, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading as well? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  03:49, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

Better? Shading isn't something I'm great with. 01:51, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

arm shading is leaking onto the haunch a bit 12:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:05, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Alt. K) - For Approval
this was actually difficult; tweaked the mouth lineart a tiny bit, but added shading to try and show the "twist" + added some bit of a lip to show it more?

Could you possibly show thw tweak a bit more? I'm not really seeing it? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:18, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

There’s only so much you can do with this angle - I’m gonna wait for more comments before changing anything

Maybe you could make his tongue poke out? I think that'll get the message across. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:53, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think the only way really to show his jaw would be to flip it but I'm not sure that's allowed? 20:29, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

It might worth opening up a discussion for it, seeing as this alt is very noteworthy for Crooked (and for any other characters and blanks this might affect)

I agree. I posted a discussion here. 15:59, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (K) ~ CBA
owo 14:22, June 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you darken the shading just on the parts that aren't white? :3

reuploaded! 20:51, June 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Super minor but the front paw furthest from us should be brown. At least what's poking through. 15:47, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 19:47, June 5, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 23:02, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Strikestone (W) - CBA
My baby boy <span style="">15:28 Tue Jun 4

Define the shading on the tabby parts, just a smidge? Might just be the screen I'm using at the moment though.

I can try. But the stripes are pure black and none of the images use highlights. But I'll see if I can do it without blocking out the colors. <span style="">13:40 Wed Jun 5

Nah it’s all good, it was definitely the screen I was using at the time. I can see the see shading fine on other screens 😊

CBA? 23:03, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

minor but there’s a line of waste underneath the tail

Silver Stripe (Ki) - CBA
FYI, my kit was the first in the set, this is what I originally had in mind for the pattern /: <span style="">15:30 Tue Jun 4

If thats the case shouldn't the others in the set be nommed for redo since this goes against the design the other have? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:47, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

The only other image is the hunter, and I honestly think they're close enough in design. 15:30, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

The huntwr has much thicker stripes, I do have to disagree on that. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:16, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

I'll have to concur that there are some noticeable differences. They should be easily tweakable, though, since it's just pale placement and stripe configuration that differs, and the file and OA are still around. But, for this one, CBA?

Owlnose (W) - CBA
my son

CBA? 23:03, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 3) ~ CBA
All colors from original image. Comments? 00:54, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 03:19, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (K) ~ CBA
aka, the last time I'll ever redo this one.

Sorry to jinx ya, but he's supposed to be shorthaired rip. 15:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? 16:58, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Littlecloud (Alt K) ~ CBA


I think there should be some more white to the muzzle and around the eyes? 15:44, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? 16:58, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Houndleap (W) ~ CBA
02:18, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Leafstar (Alt W) ~ CBA
Been meaning to update the design forever now. 02:18, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Blackclaw (W) ~ CBA
wait didnt i already upload this  05:18, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reups eye depth 12:37, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Reena (Ro) (K) ~ CBA


CBA?

Don't think this breaks CBA but there's a line of waste under the foreleg. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:58, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Downkit (K) ~ CBA


Smooth out the neck shading some? 15:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

reups

CBA? 16:58, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darkflower (W) ~ CBA
troom troom pranks

13:38, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink seems a tad neon compared to the rest? Mind colorpicking again just to make sure? 15:41, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

i copied from the queen? 03:55, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

nvm its a highlight lol 03:58, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

It looks the same to the queen to me <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:59, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reups changed it to the elder - 04:01, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Reverted back to first in set queen 04:09, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a reference to those who didn't see my comment on Discord: the warrior was first, then the queen. The StarClan has the same colors as the warrior due to me making both of them. Colorpicking from either the old warrior or the StarClan will have the master colors.

reups got the star file 05:59, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the back shading?

reups 16:14, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Dew Petal (K) ~ CBA


CBA? 15:33, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Moonflower (K) ~ For Approval


I think there should be more stripes and they're more compact? 15:39, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded pain

Whorlpelt (W) ~ CBA
15:19, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Frondkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
15:19, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you darken the tail shading a little bit?

Cinderheart (W) - For Approval
fail 100 15:28, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define/sharpen the tail stripes some? They seem more distinct on the other images. 15:38, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

is it possible to lighten the eyes at all? they look pitch black to me...but otherwise i think it's very cute!!!! 00:02, June 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Cpuld you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:39, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

the shading seems pretty smooth to me 12:13, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

reup unfortunately, as much as i want to change the eyes, i colorpicked from the other images, so if i change it we'll need to change the rest. 14:23, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

The alts and axtual set share like three to four different eye colors and this seems tok be much darker than the others. I do agree though that it wouldn't hurt lightening the eye color just a tad <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:26, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

im sorry but im actually confused. i colorpicked the lightest eye color from the old warrior which i believe was the first image in the set and the colors seem to be the same across the mc, app, queen, and old warrior image, i rly dont see how its darker. also i dont believe i need to match the alts 15:20, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

The color appears to match her other images, I honestly think the eyes can be left alone. Very pretty image, btw^^ 15:50, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - For Approval
My first charart ever lol. (Hand drawn shading, not texture) <span style="">15:29 Wed Jun 5

Could you add some shading to the hind paw? 15:37, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think there'd be a touch less white on the tail, basing off the apprentice

Could you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:27, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Dewnose (K) - For Approval
end me 16:07, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth and expand the shading some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:47, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Anywhere in particular? Or just all over? 01:53, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

The haunch could be expanded and the tail and facial could be smoothed <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:39, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:14, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Brightflower (W) - For Approval
I really tried with the flat face but it still came out iffy. 16:11, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her earpink is a little too neon and doesn't match her other images in the set. 22:21, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

You could probably make the muzzle look more flat by raising the nose and putting a line over her nose bridge, to give the illusion it's scrunched up. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:12, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I raised the jaw as you said and it looks so much better. 16:05, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading transition on the visible back paw? I know it splits at the toe mark, but it still appears abrupt

Re-uploaded  19:55, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Clover (ES) (W) ~ CBA
17:43, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add shading to the stomach? With your source I think there should be some, and it woupd help make that area look less flat. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:05, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded think I just forgot it. 08:11, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Bluestar (Alt. Ki 2) ~ For Approval
I love this girl. All colors from the other alts in the set. Comments? 00:19, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Dewkit (SC) (K) - For Approval
00:32, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Doespring (W) - For Approval
00:32, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the front leg closest to us and aybe add just a little shading to the edge of the tail so it doesn't look flat there? 08:05, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Dustpelt (W) - For Approval
this was hard lol 00:46, June 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading depth on the legs just a smidge?

reuploaded 14:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Ambermoon (Alt K) - For Approval
love the new blanks. Very cute 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:17, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt W) - Declined
I'm terrible at adjusting lineart so criticism is appreciated 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the style of the apprentjce and alt warrior i believe as well as define and expanding shading. It would alsp need texture <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:18, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source and if you're matching to his set, it needs to be a tad paler. 01:29, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

earpink is leaking out of the areas 04:05, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

I believe Jayce still wants to do this. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:06, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

I do, yes.

Since the OA wants this, just gonna decline this and remove from the list; which opens you up to take another.

Blossomfall (Ki Alt) ~ Withdrawn
im v proud that Baykit is used as a shading source and I used his shading here lol <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:56, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the dorsal stripe browner - it looks more reddish at the moment.

I thought we were agreeing to match the old images? If that's the case, this shouldn't have any texture at all. Also, could you please smooth out the shading?

Withdrawing <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:13, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sparkpelt (W) - For Approval
04:21, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:02, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:04, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

the stripes looks a bit too brown in comparison as opposed to more red. 08:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Lightningpelt (W) - For Approval
not sure if i love this 04:46, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly smooth out the transition between the white and the brown parts of her pelt? I always did like your version of her. .o.

Aspenfall (W) ~ For Approval
tried to match the old warrior, was hard since it shows a different side. i put that weird splotch of grey near the chest because i thought the old warrior patch would be sliiiiightly visible. the rest i just tried to match the style and the patch placings on the back? i also colour-picked it for everything

edit: i now see the waste oops, i'll remove that next reup

expand & darken the shading to the right of the image? <span style="">20:10 Thu Jun 6

Pebbleshine (W) ~ For Approval
15:30, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Hailstar (W)- For Approval
15:32, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Think there's a tiny bit of shading leaking from the <--- forearm onto the haunch. 16:55, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt W) - For Approval
Gotta love how she was called black. LMAO.

Re-uploaded. Had a request to define the shoulder shading, but I opted to define it overall.

Shouldn't this be short-haired? 16:55, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

...yes. oops. I’ll fix it in a bit.

Re-uploaded. I think part of the reason I made her long-furred was that it's possible she was confused for Hollyleaf during the section in which she's called black.. I may have just forgotten I can't do that.

Logfur (W) - For Approval
The image history of this image brings back too many memories.