Warriors Wiki talk:World

Badger - Silver Nomination
I'm working on expanding the history and relationship to cats. I'm just nominating it now. 18:16, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is it necessary to cite every sentence with the same reference in the Description section? It seems unnecessary to me, but other users do it, too. 18:22, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrel's got a point. If it's all from the same source, then why not just cite it at the end of the paragraph? I could understand if they were in different parts of the article, but they're not. 03:02, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

If its possible, you could also use a different book or source to cite it from; other than that, though, great work! 03:28, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly mention Midnight in the relation to cats section, as it is very important to the plot of the second series. 21:03, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

I see the references are now fixed. I also agree with Specklestream. Add Midnight in very briefly in the Relations to Clan Cats section. 18:49, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Since it is fixed and there have been no other comments, CBV? 22:59, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 20:38, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

This will now be continued until Moonflight expands the History. 19:54, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Forest of Secrets and Firestar's Quest if you can. 21:50, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Sorry for appearing dead. I've been busy. :) 18:42, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok, you don't appear dead now. 23:10, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Twoleg Kit ~ Silver Nomination
I know it needs work, so this is more like a reservation. 21:55, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it does. XD 22:24, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the "General" section if you haven't been thinking 'bout it. 23:02, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for neglecting this a lot. I'll start fixing it up more. 21:01, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Could you expand the "Relation to Clan Cats" a bit more? :3 04:07, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I expanded it a bit more. xD 18:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It needs a Description section. 01:34, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Does a Twoleg Kit count as an animal? I didn't know that... 18:35, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Twoleg doesn't have a Description Section. 18:38, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, then it needs a General section. :P 19:48, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Done, but its short, since Twoleg kits are rarely seen. 19:24, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! CBV? 03:06, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Did you check all books? I remember Twoleg Kits being mentioned e.g. in Firestar's Quest, when Fire+Sand are passing some hotel before the storm (Chapter 11), when some Twoleg kits try to capture them (Chapter 14), and some are seen swimming in the river (Chapter 16).

Also, the SkyClan's Destiny should be moved to the Super Editions, instead of the manga section.

Kind regards, 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, really? Oops, I'll check again. 17:05, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, its chapter 13. xD I added in all of the FQ history for that, and fixed the SD. 17:18, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

So, CBV? 18:38, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 17:27, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Deaths
I was thinking it would be nice to have a page with a complete list of deaths like the nursery has a complete list of births. Is this necessary? If so, which page should we put it on? 00:46, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think it would merge with the Timeline. Are we going to have a separate page, or maybe merge it with StarClan or just keep it on the timeline? 00:47, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think we should add it onto StarClan/Dark Forest but only the ones that we actually know what book they went there in (eg. Yellowfang, Bluestar, Lionheart, Hawkfrost, Feathertail)  ☮Owl      X      Glitter☮..    4EVER The Peace is Perfect☯  06:56, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, OwlxGlitter. If we only accounted for the ones that we knew where they ended up, our list wouldn't be so complete. I think we should merge it in with the timeline then. My only concern with that is that the list isn't so complete right now. We can all work on adding the deaths in. 22:30, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, lets merge it with the timeline. 18:21, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

There was an idea here, but it was scrapped because there were no contributors to work on it - maybe it's time to pick it up?

Alternatively, we can list them on the Detailed Events Timeline. Not on the main timeline though - that is intended to list only the births / deaths of more important characters (see consensus here).

Kind regards, 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

We could list them on the Detailed Timeline, but I like the idea of having the name of the cat, the age, and the cause (like in the table Helix suggested in the pervious archive). Would we be able to fit that all in the detailed timeline? 17:51, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Gathering
I was thinking, should we have a list of all the Gatherings on this page and next to it say what information was revealed from other Clans? We could also write in decisions made at the Gatherings. Is this necessary? I think it would be a good idea, but I want to get some more opinions first. 18:58, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

It sounds like a good idea, but how would we seperate each gathering. We can do it by book, but then what? Do "first gathering, second gathering..." It can get pretty confusing that way plus a hassle if there was a gathering unaccounted for. Plus there's a lot of "Prey is running well" gatherings as in no information is revealed. 19:03, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

In most gatherings, there's always some info revealed like when elders die or kits are born. I thought that we could separate the gatherings by book and by season. The Events Timeline would be useful here. 19:34, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, that's a good idea. We could include what the leaders informed at each Gathering maybe? And maybe seperate the headings by book/series. Sounds good to me. 20:47, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Finally! I'm glad someone agrees! :P If we do end up working on this idea, should we make a template for it? I think it would be better listed out, though. 21:12, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think we should make it like the cliffnotes, except...for Gatherings. I doubt that we need to make a whole template for it. 18:08, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Cliffnotes would be ok. I was thinking of the headings, but I guess we could do it either way. 19:44, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

So what does everyone else think? Cliffnotes or headings? Advantages for cliffnotes are that information can be listed briefly organized. Disadvantages are that it might take up too much room to do a heading for every single Gathering. Advantages of headings are not taking up too much room and making it easier to read, and disadvantages are that it might not be as organized. 03:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I vote for cliffnotes. :D 17:49, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I vote for headings. =D 01:59, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Atelda: what about sorting them according to year / month (sort of like the Events Timeline list)? There is one per month, and it's easy to guess which month is it from the weather's description, or comparing with the previous / next Gathering. 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree this is a good idea. I'm confused on what headings are? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:19, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Headings are the... hmm. Hard to explain. If you go to Sheer Path Beside Waterfall, you'll see in the contents that History is heading 1 and the sub heading 1.1, is In the New Prophecy Series. The sub sub heading for that (1.1.1) is Dawn. Then it goes back to 1.2 In the PO3 series... etc. Each of those are a different type of heading the biggest one, the History, Family, Quotes and References are the Heading type 2. The next biggest one is Headings type 3, and so on. That wasn't a very good description, as I fail at describing things, but I hope you understood! ;) 18:47, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

BloodClan ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded it, and added all the references. Comments? 19:36, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the Ravenpaw's Path Series. 20:05, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 20:33, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think there's anything else. Good job! 22:38, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! This will be CBVed...once more votes start? xD 22:41, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

The first three sections in the History are written in past tense. These should be rewritten in present tense.

Also, can something be added about their territory? I remember a description of Scourge's den in The Darkest Hour, and some park in Violet's short-story.

Kind regards, 17:16, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job Mistystar! ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 17:30, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar, as Helix already pointed out a few flaws in the article, it would be contradictory for you to say she did a nice job on the article. You should only give compliments after all flaws are fixed. Thanks, 18:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, fixed history. 17:59, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed territory. 18:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

According to the Guidelines, it must have a Description and Territory Section not under the Clan Information section. If there's still stuff under the Clan Information section after separating it, you can make it another section called Other Clan Information. 02:00, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, BloodClan doesn't count as an official Clan, and there isn't much describing their territory. For the other Clans, all the information about territory can be found in SotC, but BloodClan isn't included. 16:17, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's not an official Clan, but it does count as a group. The amount of text you have in the Territory section seems good enough to me. 18:50, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 19:15, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Great! I think it looks good. If there are no comments this will be CBVed. 19:17, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 02:49, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

RiverClan ~ Silver Nomination
I added an Introduction, Description, and Territory section. I also expanded all history and added another link to the See Also section. Comments? 18:50, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I found a name mistake, but I fixed it :). Could you expand Outcast, Eclipse, and Long Shadows? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:24, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded Outcast, but RiverClan is hardly mentioned because the book is all about the journey to the mountains. I couldn't expand Eclipse or Long Shadows because once again, RiverClan is hardly mentioned. Anything else? 18:42, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

In the description, the 2nd, 4th, 5th, and 6th sentences could be cited. 18:12, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The cite note 3 accounts for all the sentences before it. 18:47, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Expand the last sentence of Moonrise. 20:03, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want the summary of the Clan to be focused on any particular cat, but I'll add a few more sentences. 20:33, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Comments? 02:50, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

WindClan
Like I did with RiverClan, I will be making heavy edits on this article as well, so when I am editing it, please don't edit it so I can avoid an edit conflict. However, after I am done editing this page for a certain amount of time, all members are free to continue the work being done. 19:24, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good Squirrelflame. Keep up the good work :) ♥Firestar♥Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 22:28, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Apprentice ~ Silver Nomination
I believe it's ready. Some references have to be added, other than that, comments?  ☮Owl      X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:12, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

A lot of references need to be added, but other then that, it looks great! 05:15, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It needs a short spoiler-free introduction. Keep a few sentences but add everything else into a Description section. The Tasks section has to after that with a type 2 heading instead of type 3. Assesment should be a type 3 heading under that. Then you have to have a special cases section which is applicable here because Crookedkit had to stay a kit for a while before becomeing apprenticed, and Swiftpaw, Brightpaw and others had to stay warriors for a while. All in all, there's a lot of special cases to add in. 22:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add references to all the sections except for the beginning introduction. 18:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Made a description section and starting to add more references. I also made a rules section under Tasks. I don't think that heading is all that good, any other ideas for headings? Also what exactly do you mean by special cases? <font color="#9999FF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed"> ☮Owl    <font color="00FFFF"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  X    <font color="9966CC"><font face="Rockwell Condensed">  Glitter☮..    <font color="FF66FF">4EVER <font color="FF33FF">The Peace is Perfect☯  05:56, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Tasks must go before Education. Special cases are cases when apprentices don't follow the normal rules, such as becoming an apprentice after six moons, staying an apprentice too long, or becoming a warrior without a final assessment. 18:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Can I Join?
Can I please join project world? Stoneclaw33

Of course! Make sure to read the Guidelines and I'm sure you'll be a valuable member of this project. I'll add you in. 22:26, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Allied Clans ~ Silver Nomination
I added the Omen of the Stars section for TFA, and added references to the description. Comments? 20:01, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

You're missing a lot of alliances. Remember, every known alliance has to be added. For starters, when Firestar and Sandstorm left to rebuild SkyClan, all four Clans allied aginst the foxes. 20:30, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I don't remember. If you know so many that I missed, then why don't you telll me which ones I'm missing and which books they're in? 20:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

The Battle against the foxes (forgot what book), ThunderClan and WIndCLan allying to bring WIndClan home (os2), the partial alliance when Cinderpelt helped the ShadowClan warriors back to health (os4), RiverClan allying to help ThunderClan against the rogues (os4), RiverClan sheltering ThunderClan during the fire (os4), TigerClan and BloodClan partially allying (os6), six cats from the cats allying on the Journey to Midnight (np1), etc. I don't want to list them all now, but as soon as you finish those, I'll continue. 22:16, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot what book? Thats a lot of help. Well, ThunderClan bringing WindClan home isn't exactly an alliance, and neither is Cinderpelt helping ShadowClan warriors back to help. An alliance is when "agreement or friendship between two or more parties, made in order to advance common goals and to secure common interests." So, then, a lot of your suggestions don't count. 22:31, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I added some of the ones you suggested, but only the ones that I actually thought counted as alliances. 22:38, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

To ally is "to associate or connect by some mutual relationship, as resemblance or friendship." So when ThunderClan helped WIndClan come home, they connected and tore apart their past experiences to help. An alliance doesn't always have to be between two large parties. It can also be when two people (or cats) forget about what they did in the past and arrived to help each other. RiverClan helping with rogues, or RiverClan sheltering ThunderClan count as alliances. 22:49, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I added RiverClan helping with rogues. Its in os3, not os4. I'll add RiverClan sheltering ThunderClan. 22:52, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 23:00, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should add that in Dawn, WindClan first allied with ThunderClan and then ThunderClan allied with ShadowClan to help in the Twoleg attack. Finally, RiverClan allied at the end. 23:23, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 21:46, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Expand Dawn. Explain the Twoleg attack and say that ShadowClan send a patrol for help, ThunderClan and WIndClan came, they all allied, etc. 02:59, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rat- Silver Nomination
I added the Power of Three section and filled in Outcast. Comments? ♥Firestar♥<font color="#33CCFF">Firestar! ♥CATS ARE AWESOME!:)♥ 15:49, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

You need citations for the description and relation to clan cats. 21:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar. Please. Read the Guidelines. The article needs a Description section which is about 3-4 paragraphs in length. This information must come from external links, and must have references stating where you found it. I can only have a short spoiler-free introduction. And most important of all, it needs references. There isn't even a reference section yet. This needs lots of work. 02:57, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Lightningclan
Leader:firestar                              Deputy:Sunheart               Aprentices:Amberpaw Bluepaw Redpaw Starpaw Rainpaw               Queens:Sunheart Willowcloud Scarfire Sandwillow Wavewater Shadepelt Littlewish