Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Firestar (star) - redone
Raelic's image then i redid it for unfortunate reasons. credits to fox for finishing the shading. also, i color picked from jake's loner and completely matched his pattern, who i also happen to be the OA of– nothing fancy here 06:27, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Can you tweak the color of the ear pink? It's really difficult to see.

Waste floating around the character, get the magic wand and kill itPotato&#61;) (talk) 13:58, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

reup to people redoing this in the future: just match jake. i didnt do anything different from his images 14:01, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

The waste is still therePotato&#61;) (talk) 15:12, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you slim and taper the stripes some to better match the kittypet? Since we're basically redoing everything, I believe the kittypet is first in the set. 22:56, February 3, 2019 (UTC)

reup ill change that shading next... 04:01, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

oh wait guys question: do i need the scar/shedded ear? 05:32, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

I believe so yes. Unless it's cited otherwise, StarClan cats keep their scars and wounds. Also, this is super nitpicky and I know shading tint is artists choice but I think it should be changed to a bit more red? Idk what tint you have now, it looks black/green but it seems to really stand out against the orange. You're free to refute this tho since it's artists choice, I'm just nitpicky ^^;; —

None of the stuff is in his description anymore, and I believe it was said that those who died in the great battle were healed of their injuries, which is why other cats also had their scars and torn ears and whatnot removed. Firestar is no exception to that. Also, I think the image is fine without changing the tint... I used black on Jake. o.O ​

Again, it's just a personal preference to me; I generally think black shading on bight/light coloured things can stand out a bit but Burnt doesn't have to. —

ill revamp the shading completely in my next upload. i dont think i did the right style for this... 07:52, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

reup ok nvm about the revamp lol i hate shading these kinds of patterns but i tweaked it a little. @riinrin i would've make it red initially but frankly, uh photoshop is a pain and its a hassle... 08:17, February 5, 2019 (UTC

needs to match kp since that's the new first in the set 20:10, 02/5/2019

Firestar (A) ~ Redone
22:32, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smudge the stripes a little more? 05:45, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

needs to match kp since that's the new first in the set 20:08, 02/5/2019

Reups Smudgey smudge. The colors should match, and I did reference the kittypet when I was making this. I am allowed some leeway because it's a different side...can you specifically tell me what parts are different from the kittypet? 20:36, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes, there's too many; icy said they matched their deputy (below) to the kittypet. idk it's really up to all of you making the set on what you do for stripes but with the kittypet being put on the approval page, then the set being redone at the same time it's hard to say /which/ was posted first with the new pattern... 20:45, 02/5/2019

I may not have matched it enough, though. I did try to match it to the kittypet but if Vec thinks hers is fine I can add more stripes to my deputy. 01:33, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

If I may, I do believe mine matches the kittypet, the first in this new set, particularly on how compact the stripes are on the haunch (which when analyzing the apprentice and deputy seems to be the most different, but other than that, I think it matches well). In addition, when matching tabbies, I like to count the amount of stripes on the original to capture a rough idea of the amount to better match the design. Going from top of the shoulder to the end of the haunch, the kittypet has roughly seventeen, and mine, within the same parameters, has fifteen. No offense to Icy, but the deputy has only roughly eleven, from my counts. Though it is a different side of the cat, and that has to be taken into consideration. I know that may seem kinda petty and nit picky to stoop down to counting stripes of all things, and I do apologize, but besides matching the colors and stripe style, the spaces between them is the next thing to match in order to capture the overall style. Those are just my thoughts. oh geez sorry for the wall of text 03:54, February 6, 2019 (UTC)

you guys are the artists, its up to ypu on how to match between ur images; i was just pointing out that they didn’t quite match lol 03:57, 02/6/2019

Firestar (D) - Redone
Lots of OAs on this one. Insane, Ivy, and Paleh, and then with the new blanks it was me and then tweaked. 23:34, February 4, 2019 (UTC)

Waste outside the tail, ripped ear and back legsPotato&#61;) (talk) 01:42, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I could not find the waste in the ear. 05:44, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

The star and app have more stripes 07:14, 02/5/2019

Define earpink a little? 07:12, 02/5/2019

Technically the kittypet is the first in the set so I am matching that. 07:16, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 19:58, February 5, 2019 (UTC)

Marmalade (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA is Jayie then I tweaked it for clumped fur. in the process I somehow made the fur purple.

Flametail (MC) - Tweaked
oa is me, tweaked to be fiery 20:04, 02/5/2019

hmm this seems slightly darker than the star and app that were tweaked for this; could you check up on that? could be wikia messing with colors or whatnot though

I noticed that too, I just did an overlay at the same opacity as the star; Echo sent me the file for that. I'll see if I can play around with it more though 20:32, 02/5/2019

reuploaded also lightened shading a touch per spooks request 20:50, 02/5/2019

Waste outside --> this front  back legPotato&#61;) (talk) 01:32, February 6, 2019 (UTC)