Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 82

Tallstar (A) ~ Approved


UGH this is such a fail DX Took all colors from his Warrior image, and highlights are coming from the back. *hangs head in shame* Fail fail fail fail fail! I tried to smudge...and got a major fail....Dont look at my shame DX! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the black into the white a lot and add shading, because I can't see any. 16:29, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay. *bags head* I hate this image DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:32, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:35, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The black on his head needs to be touching the corner of his eyes like on his leader image. And lengthen the tail. 18:19, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

One thing, I can't make his tail longer, for stuff like that, I use Pixirl, and his tail touches the end of the box. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:39, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can do it for you if you email me the file with layers. Neneshell@gmail.com. 18:47, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't use files on this one, for fear i'd lose them like i did with Rubblepaw.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

So how are you editing it? If you don't have the file, how can you make changes, besides redoing it each time you exit? 19:46, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, like no, i have the one file that's his image, but i didn't do layers like a layer for his color and earpink and shaidng and stuff, and just did that on the one thing. Like I opened up the blank, and took the black, drew on his patches, filled in the patches, and then darkened the white a bit, added shading and highlights, the blurred everything, and added his eyes color. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:18, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

And i did this one on Pixirl....not Gimp, 'cause Gimp is being spazzy for me atm. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:21, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

You have to save the image as an .xcf, I believe - if it's the same on Pixlr - for the layers to save. Doing everything on one layer is not a good idea. For example, what if someone asked you to lighten the patch, which I was going to? You can't just use the dodge tool, or it'd lighten the lineart as well. I can't tell you how to make your chararts, but I can advise you to use layers. 22:23, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, no matter what the tail does need to be lengthened to match his leader blank. 23:50, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken/add shading. I really can not see it. a cat ♥  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 03:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing...for reasons.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 04:00, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over, if thats okay. 06:03, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

Go ahead, DJ. Maple: next time you withdraw an image, remember to change the title. 10:01 Wed Dec 21

I did, I put 'withdrawn.' I'm sure i did.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:28, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

She did, DJ changed it I'm assuming. DJ, don't change the heading; only leads should do that. 21:23, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. 03:17, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

Lighten up the black a bit. F i r e s t a r ! Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:20, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. -- 04:06, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I redid the whole image, and fixed all of the above. 23:18, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011
 * Also fail on the tail stretch. 23:23, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

There's waste around the charart. 00:24, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  03:21, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Extend the image border up so his tail isn't cut off. 03:36, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but how do I do that? I'm kind of new around GIMP... I tried rotating the image but the lineart just got blurred. <span style="">23:20, Fri, Dec, 23, 2011

Go to 'Image' then to 'Canvas Size' at the top, then make it taller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  10:27, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I did that, the canvas went bigger, but the border stayed where it was. I could just make the tail tip rounder so it looks like it's not cut off from the border. <span style="">00:46, Sun, Dec, 25, 2011

Would you like help? If you have an .xcf file then send me that in an email, otherwise I'll just work off the .png to help you out :3  02:15, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention. After you change the canvas size, you have to go to 'Layer' then hit 'Layer to Image Size' or something along those lines. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I tried that too Pale, but unfortunatly, it didn't work. :( Ivy, if you want to fix it, you can. I suggest you work off the png image, since the Gimp one (xcf) is really odd and doesn't look like the image I have here. I also made the tail tip rounder a bit, so Reuploaded I guess. <span style="">09:33, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Actually, don't worry. I've got it. <span style="">09:39, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

Reuploaded -  <span style="">09:47, Mon, Dec, 26, 2011

It looks like his tail is kinked near the middle, try to smooth it out like the regular chararts. 15:30, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I tried that "kink" to try to make it look like the normal blanks. <span style="">00:28, Tue, Dec, 27, 2011

Smooth out the tail. It's too thin in the middle and too thick at the top. 00:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the white, and make the markings match the leader image more. The white on the forehead should go up higher, the white should cover the whole haunch, there shouldn't be any white on his shoulder, only on his forearm, and the white on his chest should go up quite as high. also redden the earpink a bit and make the eyes more amber than yellow. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:37, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I can help you with the lineart on the tail if you need it. It's really no that hard. Just select part of the tail, move it up higher, and add in the missing lineart in the middle of the tail. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:42, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :/ I don't quite like the tail. <span style="">01:52, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

Thicken the lineart on the tail and don't make it bulbous on the top  01:58, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I could probably do it for you, if you like. I know a perfect way to do it. 02:00, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay Oblivion. Just do it off the png image though, since the xcf is bad. <span style="">00:02, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Re-uploaded. There you go :3 00:14, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Oblivion, this looks great. Comments? <span style="">00:44, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Define the shading and darken it, I can barely see it, and make the white on the face a bit.... cleaner. I don't know how to describe it, it just looks kinda messy right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:19, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Yuck! <span style="">00:23, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Lighten the black a bit and darken the shading slightly. It's not bad! I like it :3 <span style="">01:02 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded -  I don't think changes are showing. <span style="">00:18, Sun, Jan, 1, 2012

Add some more shading to the tail and darken the shading on the haunch. Clean up the white a bit more on the face, and make the face "highlight" bigger. <span style="">01:57 Wed Jan 4

Reuploaded -  I don't know how good that went, but I want this approved before it gets to number 1. <span style="">04:23, Wed, Jan, 4, 2012

Blur where the white patches meet the black. 02:34, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Dull down the ear-pink a bit; it looks too bright Scarlet   wind    ✧ L i   s a   n n a ✧  02:41, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  ... <span style="">05:57, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

This looks good. CBA? 04:43, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

None, Approved. 04:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (A) ~ Approved
An opening! Did this in like... 10mins. Yes, very sloppy. I know I did say I'd never do a wavy tabby again (is this one?) but, this was the first thing I saw. Tell me if the uploading doesn't work. It comes up with Tallstar Apprentice, for soem reason. I know there is waste. <span style="">05:55, Wed, Dec, 28, 2011

Very nice! Thin out the stripes on the haunch a tiny bit. 07:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad. This is wonderful! 16:01, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thank you. The lightening of the highlights didn't do much -_- <span style="">02:38, Thu, Dec, 29, 2011

There's a halo of waste around the image  16:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Changes are not showing yet -  Dang you waste. <span style="">00:22, Fri, Dec, 30, 2011

Maybe it's just me, but it looks like there should be another stripes on the haunch (if you're matching the warrior image) <span style="">22:49 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded -  Yep, you're right. I added them. <span style="">01:47, Mon, Jan, 2, 2012

Smudge the earpink a bit into the ear. Lovely job :3 <span style="">02:18 Tue Jan 3

Lighten the face and chest shading just a tad. 02:16, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I didn't lighten the shading too much, otherwise it wouldn't match, so I lightened the belly shading too. <span style="">04:04, Wed, Jan, 4, 2012

CBA? <span style="">03:55 Sat Jan 7

None, Approved. 04:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Voletooth (A) ~ Approved
Took the colors from the other images. (I did the elder) Comments? 18:30, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. Very pretty! <3 <span style="">02:37 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded. Thank you. =3 00:24, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? <span style="">06:42 Fri Jan 6

None, Approved. 04:43, January 8, 2012 (UTC)