Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Cinderpelt (MCA) - Tweaked
Defined and added shading depth; oa was Jenrock. Comments? 06:11 Tue Aug 13

The shading looks kinda blotchy; smooth it out? 13:20, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:23 Tue Aug 13

It still looks a bit blotchy. 23:36, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

It also looks kind of paintbrushy/blunt. 23:33 Wed Aug 14

Re-uploaded, please don't call my shading paintbrushy and/or blunt; this is how I shade my chararts. 03:26 Sun Aug 18

Maybe still blur/smooth it a little bit more, especially in the haunch/back area? 16:31, August 18, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

I honestly think it's fine, but I'll change it if others agree. 22:02 Tue Aug 20

I think that it could be blurred a little bit more and it still looks blotchy. 22:20, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but it's been a week. If any lead disagrees with my decision, they are more than welcome to change the heading back.

If nobody disagrees or minds, may I take over? 22:29, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up OA be Mounty, tweaked for shading, comments? Changes might not be showing 15:51, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I think it should be defined a little more, imho.

Sol (Ki) ~Tweaked
Tweaked for tufted tail tip. Latest OA was Paleh. Changes not showing. 21:17, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Could you try to curve the part where the tuft and the tail meet! It looks a bit crooked 17:50, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing. 22:23, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! The white tail tip looks a bit gray. 23:49, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 00:25, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I can't actually tell if the tail tip is white or not. It seems brown.

I already fixed that; the changes aren't showing,though. 00:29, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I think the changes might be showing now, but it still seems a little gray-brownish? If not, my apologies.

I think it's fine, but I'll wait to see what others think. 18:06, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Skye, it does look a bit gray-brownish. 21:02, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 01:09, August 27, 2013 (UTC)

Lineart gap on the tufted tail. 21:09 Tue Aug 27

Where? I don't see it. 21:56, August 27, 2013 (UTC)

It's just right of the big tuft on the tail. Could you shorten the tail a bit? It's current length just looks a bit unrealistically long. Nice job! 01:49, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, but I'll wait to see what others think. 18:55, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

It does seem a bit long, honestly.

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. 19:20, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Can you somehow move the tail <-- probably about two - four pixels? It appears to be bunched up near the pelt. If you think it's fine, that's cool with me.

Twist (Ro) ~ Redone
Comments? 04:33, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading just a bit? jfc this is amazing.

Don't want to sound mean, but i find the color of the ginger extremely neon and the black sort of green. Alter the colors a little please? The pattern is a little pixelly as well. 21:07 Tue Aug 27

I think the ginger's fine, honestly.

The black's completely desaturated, so I can't help with the green part. Could be your monitor. I'll define the tail shading and smudge the pattern a little bit, but I sort of like the hard-edged look on the fur. 05:01, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Brook (Lo) Redone
okay 06:26, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad. 20:53, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Define and expand shading tons. gj 21:07 Tue Aug 27

Thornclaw (W) ~ Redone
So I guess this passed?? I don't really know anymore. Last OA was me. Comments? 23:12, 27, 08, 2013

Earpink looks a little too defined. this is amazinggg omg 23:21 Tue Aug 27

Ear pink looks fine to me, imho. Maybe define the tail shading a bit though?

Woah... He be sexy! Sharpen the ear-pink and blur the shading on the pale bit of the neck. 00:59, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks you guys 8D 04:56, 28, 08, 2013

Thornclaw (A) ~ Redone
Redone because of shading and stripes and everything. Last OA was me. Comments? 04:56, 28, 08, 2013

He be a sexy apprentice too! Darken the shading a bit more and define it on the head 04:59, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you, Scarly. 8DD 05:11, 28, 08, 2013

Define the shading on the upper part of the tail, perhaps?

Tigerstar (W) - Redone
Does it match I have no idea but it was redone because it didn't match Bramblestar when it probably should match Hawkfrost considering they're all identical and Hawkfrost has a stated pattern so um yeah. comments? 22:20, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think changes are showing so: http://www.ezimba.com/work/130829C/ezimba11655372140000.png  22:21, August 28, 2013 (UTC)