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Dappletail's Kit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Poor kit. The colours are based off Dappletail's images so credit to the OA's. 00:12, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and the back paw. 01:00, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 01:50, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

Is it just me or is he spotted??

Pretty sure it's texture. Anyway, this is cute! Could you define the light on the back paw just a bit more? 11:42, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smudge/add more "dapples"? I think they might look more like texture if you did one or the other, right now she does look a tad spotted. 13:01, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Yeah it's texture. 20:31, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

The texture still looks like tiny spots, and I don't think that's what it's supposed to look like... I dunno, I'm still really tired and it was a long day yesterday.

Well, I can smudge it more? I think it's okay... Can I have a second opinion on this? 00:29, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you please connect the texture lines together to make them lines? Texture shouldn't look like dots. 00:34, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean? I don't quite understand. 01:44, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

What I'm saying is that the texture you have right now (dots), needs to be lines. Texture isn't supposed to look like dapples. Can you please re-do the texture? 01:47, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

You actually can have dapples as texture, if they are dense enough they can be clustered together to look like soft fur. right now, I'd say it could be denser to now confuse it with dapples. 04:21, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I redid it. It does look much better. 00:20, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Quiet Rain (E) - CBA
I couldn't resist sorry, Quiet Rain is my favorite cat as well as having my favorite pattern o.o 10:42, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the tuft of fur on her head or make it less pronounced. It looks kinda odd right now. This is gorgeous btw. .o. 10:45 Thu Jul 30

Re-uploaded Thanks so much! I tried messing around with it since I like tufts on heads my linear editing skills are not quite good lol. 10:52, July 30, 2015 (UTC)

Wouldn't the tuft be further up her head? Like, more between the ears...? It seems... kinda like a unicorn horn right now and I now dub her Princess Quiet Rain.

Re-uploaded 13:38, July 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink, please. 04:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:07, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

I love Quiet Rain x3 CBA?

Millie (Alt Lo) ~ CBA
Eww... This. So. ugly. 12:33, July 30, 2015 (UTC)


 * Slams Foxy out of the way* This. So. Pretty. Smooth out shading a little and define shading on the head?

Re-uploaded eh 08:43, July 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head a little more? I can't see it, but it might just be me. 11:51, July 31, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the belly shading just a tick, please. 04:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 06:30, August 1, 2015 (UTC)

This is so beautiful :O CBA?

Snowtuft (DF) ~ For Approval
Yay! Another image :) 23:26, August 2, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful! Could you smoothen out the back highlight a bit? 00:25 Mon Aug 3

I didn't use highlights at all xD Could you specify something else, perhaps? 00:28, August 3, 2015 (UTC)

Well, 'highlight' as in where the light is hitting his back. Basically, where the shading coming from the stomach ends. Just blur that out a little bit. 00:32 Mon Aug 3

Also blur the tail shading please. Nice! 00:44, August 3, 2015 (UTC)

Wah~! So nice :3 wait I thought this was Splooks? Define light on the shoulder^^ It's so nice omg :o

Reuploaded ^^ I took it, but I felt bad so I wanted to give it back, but she said I deserve it ;-; 13:37, August 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you give a little shading at the pawpad, blur the belly shading a tad more and make the shading a little less blue? Just a little bit I'm in love with that blue shading. 03:49, August 4, 2015 (UTC)