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Cinders (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yep, Cinders is Sol's mother. I went by what I saw in the manga. Sorry I didn't get to add it to the table. I'm not back on it yet. 00:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the patches. Nice work. 00:48, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, darken the earpink, and possibly smudge the patches a bit, as they look a little...conform, not sure if that's the appropriate word. *shrug* She looks neat! 00:50, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll work on all those in the morning. 01:13, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Did you use pure black? You shouldn't have, as it messes with the lineart. Change it to a darker gray. 04:42, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, if you look carefully, you can just see the lineart. Trollsky She who Trolls everything 06:45, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well regardless of whether it's pure black or not, it still needs to be lightened. Also, smudge the patches a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:48, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular and blur it. 10:41, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did everything said. Changes are showing. 14:21, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit. 14:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

ig i can still comment here, the back left leg seems a lot darker than it should beBlue dawn  With Clouds like Shining  eyes... 15:00, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's supposed to be Bluedawn. 21:10, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the ear-pink too. 22:22, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to blur and smudge the patches a lot but other than that darken the ear pink and make it triangular. 22:26, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the "black" or whatever it is a little bit. I'm having trouble telling it apart from the lineart. 22:29, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define/largen the ear-pink. And make it less, hot pink-ish. 01:46 Thu Nov 24

Reuploaded Changes are showing now. 12:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the fur more or blur the black spot more. Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  00:30, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing yet  00:43, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Ok now they are showing. 00:46, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, try to smudge where the black meets the white on the neck. I think you overblurred. Silver, if you have trouble trying to fix it, just ask. ;) 02:27, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry the new version is horrible. My computer needs fixed AGAIN so I'm on my dads. 13:22, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, it kind of doesn't look like it has any. 23:19, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Also enlarge the earpink. 01:13, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

I'll get to that tomorrow morning. 00:56, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This scares me >_>  18:37, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

I really like this. Can you possibly blur the patches more, though? 05:39, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I'd say smudge the patches a tad more so they look like Ivy's image. 08:01 Mon Nov 28

Reuploaded Yes it's smudged not blurred. 00:17, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink? 05:19, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

The white on the muzzle looks pure white. 21:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing yet. 21:05, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay this hasn't changed too much since you started. Make the ear pink bigger and blur it. Lighten it a little bit too. Smudge the black patches by the legs and then blur it. Do the same with the patches. If it doesn't seem too different, just keep repeating the process. 15:30, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded hateithateithateithateit >_____<  22:26, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Try to look at other pictures of cats that are tortoiseshell, like Poppycloud or even Sol. See how the patches are smudged like that? Try to blur it and then smudge it, like on DJ's charart above. (Sorry, I'm very horrible at explaining)  21:13, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I need to make it look like Cinders queen image Misty. 22:12, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Giving a slight bump. 13:36, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like I'm making myself sound impatient ._. Should I smudge it more? 23:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Silver...do not comment like that on your images. When someone finds something, they'll comment. Make the white come up past the muzzle and onto the forehead like the queen image. 20:47, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing. 22:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the spots or blur them more. 23:49, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular to make it fit more into the ear. 05:26, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

Could you blur or smudge the parts where the brown and black meet? 16:17, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 23:13, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen the earpink. 22:52 Wed Dec 7

Sorry I haven't made an edit. My new computer doesn't like pixlr and I have to wait until after new years to download GIMP again. I'll try to download Gimp as soon as I can though. 22:41, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did everything said. May I please have some help with the ear pink? It's being a real pain for me ;-;  22:58, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

For the earpink, you can fuzzy select it if you don't use layers and move it around, guassion blur, etc. If you use layers, you can always move, blur, dodge it without having to use any fuzzy select or going into the other sections of the charart. Hope this helps. <span style="">05:05, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Reuploaded Finally, earpink I'm proud of 8D. 13:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink looks good :3 smudge the patches and darken and blur the shading. <span style="">00:07 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded Decided to smudge it to look similar to Cinders queen. Also darkened/blurred the shading. 12:54, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge it even more. <span style="">23:45 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded  00:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where you have smudged it. 15:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Make the earpink triangular. (You forgot to sign xD ^^) <span style="">19:50 Sun Dec 11 Reuploaded  23:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's ready for CBA  05:15, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Gah sorry Silvereye, but... there's some waste above her head. Erase that. <span style="">07:57 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded Oh that's fine wild. I actually thought that was a smudge on my computer xD. 12:09, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki2)- For Approval


In the allegiances for Bluestar's Prophecy, she was described as a gray she-cat with blue eyes, and, in case you couldn't tell by my username, she's my favorite character, so I snatched her up as soon as I found out she would get one for that. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad. Brighten the ear-pink and darken the shading. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 23:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice! Blur the left ear's earpink. <span style="">00:14 Fri Dec 2

Cute! Define the shading and highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:53, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 02:18, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the --> (right) side of her. <span style="">23:54, Fri, Dec, 2, 2011

Lighten the shading on the paws. 19:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks as if it's not in the right place on ---> this side. <span style="">21:21 Sat Dec 3

And center this ---> ear pink. And blur <--- this sides earpink a bit. <span style="">22:50 Sat Dec 3

This looks the color of her pale alt, which is still kinda blue-gray, maybe color pick from her gray leader alt? It'd look more gray probably. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 21:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen and center the ear pink. Darken and blur the shading, it looks like you have none. 21:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bluestar11796 23:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is gray and define the shading. 02:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the gray lineart, defined the shading, and got rid of some waste i found; changes not showing. Bluestar11796 17:29, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found some more waste, and changes are still not showing. Bluestar11796 17:53, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading on the <-- 21:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the right ear pink. 21:54, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading placement is off, I belive. If not, lighten the shading on <--- that side and blur it so it looks a little bit better. 23:12, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

As said above and blur the shading too 23:55, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose color different from the pelt color, as it looks the same. <span style="">05:34, Tue, Dec, 6, 2011

As said already BLUR THE SHADING TOOOOONS! Also the shading placement is off it should be on the neck and on the legs too. 14:36, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded it looks blotchy, but I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 16:11, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like there are white streaks on her face and chest. Make those gray. 16:45, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes might not be showing. Bluestar11796 19:23, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a bit, and blur the highlights (if any) and shading to make them blend more together. 22:29, December 6, 2011 (UTC). The whole pelt color looks blotchy and uneven, smooth it out 23:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore. Bluestar11796 00:07, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sure you can. Smooth it out. 01:02, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's possible to blur it. If you're using pixlr, change to something else. I know pixlr only allows you to blur so much. 03:23, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

I do use pixlr at school, but I can't use gimp right now 'cause I'm at school right now, and I can't download anything on the school computers. Bluestar11796 17:52, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Use the Gaussian blur on pixlr. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:51, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpinks. <span style="">21:49 Thu Dec 8

Are you still working on this? 20:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. :3 01:08, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It hasn't been seven days yet. 01:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. And sorry for the delay; my computers at home are crashing, so I haven't been able to get on, but I remembered that my school has photoshop, so, yeah. Bluestar11796 17:43, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the shading placement, then blur a LOT. Do you use layers? Brightstripes 16:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I just started using layers, but it's kinda hard with photoshop, because you can't change the background, and that's all I can use right now. I'll try, though. Bluestar11796 18:56, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Seedkit (Ki) - For Approval
Oi...I must really like kits. :P Comments~? 19:16, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Redden the ear-pink and define it in her ginger ear. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 19:23, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks. 19:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

<3 Beautiful Twi! Blur the places where the patches are smudged, they're too sharp. 19:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Thanks~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, I see waste. I'll kill it~ 19:41, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Killed the evil waste~! >:) 19:45, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

So cute! *noms* Define the shading. :3 (probably more evil waste for you to kill) 19:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate the evil waste. :P 22:09, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink the slightest bit. Make the ear pink on ---> that side a little bit smaller to make the other one. 23:14, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine to me. 01:43, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

What to change and what not to change? 02:11, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to change the earpink, it's fine, however could you define the shading a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - But of course. :3 21:44, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawn to reserve another charart 00:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

If this is withdrawn may I do it? 00:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may. Go reserve it 00:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the confusion, I thought we were doing apprentice images. Is it okay if I still work on it, or no? 00:40, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok so back to for approval. I will bw working on this so it might take a day or two because I am going to be doing it on GIMP. Thanx for your patience. 21:55, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. I just can't work with this...Gimp shows the lineart blurred and all and I couldn't work with this. I'm sorry. 15:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Since this is withdrawn (again), may I do it? Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  15:47, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to ask, just go for it ;3 18:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading was to light in my opinion, so I darkened it and I found more evil waste to kill! Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  19:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! SO pretty, Make the earpinks the same size. <span style="">19:48 Sun Dec 11

Reuploded Purplemoon   We wish you a Perry Christmas...  19:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'd lighten the whole image because it looks too dark. Also, blur the neck shading as it looks to hard edge. 20:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Purplemoon  <font color="FF6699">Three Advent candles lighted  20:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image a bit more. <span style="">06:58 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded Purplemoon  <font color="FF6699">Three Advent candles lighted  12:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Crop the image to get rid of the extra space and lighten the white. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It was hard to lighten the white... Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Three Advent candles lighted  21:56, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redwillow (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
Horrible. Comments? 02:00, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define/darken the shading, define the haunch highlight and the one on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and brighten it. 02:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh I just noticed I uploaded on meh B-Day ^^ 02:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Either darken the head shading or lighten the "highlights". <span style="">02:27 Thu Dec 8

This doesn't look very tawny... Maybe take the color from Birchfall's alt? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:36, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the color from the ear pink chart, I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else has an opinion. 02:38, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be blurred a lot. Also, Take the colors from Oakheart's alt warrior, if you're looking for tawny. This doesn't look...tawny...if you ask me. If it is, it's pale and should be darkened. 03:02, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Did Okay I darkened it because it is tawny I took it from the ear pink chart. I would have used gausion blur, but I don't really know how to use it :P 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better, actually. Now, define the ear pink. I don't care if it's from the chart or not. I can't see it. 03:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading quite a bit. Also, just cause the color (pelt OR earpink) is from the chart, doesn't always make it right. Sometimes the colors just need to be tweaked to fit certain images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading (sorry I don't mean to repeat things) and make the earpink darker. 16:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is gonna be the death of me 18:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad more. 13:10, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made it worse. 02:27, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be darkened more. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Molepaw (OTS) (A) - For Approval
I don't like the shading, but I didn't know the placement. And I got the earpink and nose from the kit...it looks a little neon, but that's my opinion. Comments? 02:22, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the eyes and the shading :) And also, perhaps blur the connection between the cream and pelt color on the tell a tad? 02:23, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like me to email you the shading placement? I made one for my friend, I'll share =) 02:27, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patches look a tad red... Make them a bit more brown and lighten/make the ear-pink a tad less neon. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:28, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be great, Ivy. I'll work on the rest after my shower. 02:30, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the cream a ton. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  02:48, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^_^ 03:26, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Here are two versions of how you could do the shading ^^ Smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">03:42 Thu Dec 8

The cream looks greenish, unless I need to get mai eyes checked. =3 04:33, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look greenish. Please lighten the nose pink. 16:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it after teh funeral. :3 20:20, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, it looks greenish to me too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Really...? I don't see it, though it may be my computer... I color picked straight from the kit image... 05:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

If you did that and are having trouble with the color, why not just color pick off his father, Berrynose? :3  16:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur/smudge a bit more where his cream meets his brown? 16:09, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded - ^^ 17:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? 01:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt CBA, but the colours don't match the kit image, and the shading doesn't make sense to me. Try to match the colours better and if you're having troubles with shading placement, look at one of these examples. <span style="">06:28 Mon Dec 12

Yellowfang (A) - For Approval


Okay, so, she's in 'Chararts needing images' Under Thunderclan. For a Apprentice...wwhy, i don't know, i think it should've been in Shadowclan but okayyy. Anyway here she is! I didnt know if i shouldv'e torn her ears and give her scars or not, so i didn't and i took ALL chararts from her mc image. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:59, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

The Warriors App said her apprentice name was Yellowpaw. =P Blur the shading. 03:01, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Could you make the fur spikes more consitant with the other images please? 03:03, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the snout needs to be shortened. 03:04, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the part not in shadow on her tail longer and run the length of her tail. Smudge the pelt color into the ear. Give her a light part on the dip in her back as the light would hit her there. 03:07, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and she needs a dark gray/black nose 03:19, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. <span style="">03:42 Fri Dec 9

Blur the highlights. (If you used them) -- 13:03, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ruffles in the fur a bit larger and sharper like her other chararts, also make the muzzle a bit shorter. - Scarletwind    ✧ L i s a n n a<span style="color: #592e81">✧          23:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the ear-pink more please. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

Okay, give me a few, i have to get my S.S. HW done, how do i make her ruffles sharper? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:46, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and smudge the earpink into the ear. Curve the line of the jaw more. <span style="">22:44 Sat Dec 10

Blend the highlight/shading on the tail into the pelt. 18:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:49, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you feel comfortable with it, I think the image would benefit from teh eyes being rounded slightly. 03:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

How would I do that? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:29, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) ~ For Approval
I GOT VOLECLAW :D I copied all of the shading and colors from his warrior so dont be slapping me 4 that :P 13:45, December 8, 2011 (UTC) (im going to eventually set up my sig on here :P )

Blur the shading a lot and try to make it look like it's coming from one light source. Nice job, though. ^^ 14:11, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and smudge where the earpink meets the gray, and the two paws farthest from us should be darker to match with the shading. 14:14, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLAODED, changes aren't showing :| 14:29, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement more like the one in the tutorial. The shading doesn't make sense right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:32, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye and smudge the pelt color into the earpink so he looks floofeh =3 18:13, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

And add a white pixel to the eye if it's not already there. *can't see it* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  19:06, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

He seems darker than his other images, or is it just my bad eyes? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 00:01, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading on the tail or darken the shading on the belly and legs. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. I can see the layers in which they get stronger. 20:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, Bluefeathers friend here, she said she'd reupload it tomorrow. 14:07, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think I will re-do this tomorrow as I cannot stand how this is. And I can't really fix the shading placement because for some reason, on Pixlr, every time I use gaussian blur on it, it changes the placement :\ 00:39, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you need any help, if the shading isn't going right, I could help you. <span style="">01:47 Tue Dec 13

REUPLOADED Mrrrrrrrrrooooooowwwwwwwww :P 12:23, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

THIS IS BOOTIFUL BLUEFEATHER! No comments from me :) Grayflower10 16:22, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Don't leave a comment just for complimenting the image unless there haven't been any comments for a couple days, please, Grayflower. Blur the shading and smudge the earpink into the ears a bunch. The shading still doesn't make a lot of sense. You also need to fix your signature, Bluefeather. <span style="">19:53 Tue Dec 13

Ok, first of all, i've been having SO MUCH TROUBLE WITH SMUDGING. This entire time it's been for approval i've been trying to smudge it in but it just won't. I did the shading exactly like the apprentice tutorial....and I honestly don't think that the shading needs blurred. Not trying to say that I won't blur it but I just don't see why it needs blurred. And Sweetflower is making me a sig so it'll be fixed soon :) 20:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay well I can't see any lack of shading on the shoulder ("highlights", if you will) and it doesn't make much sense. It'll look a lot better if you add some "highlight" (just erase the shading) on the shoulder and then blur it manually if you use Gaussian blur. <span style="">01:29 Wed Dec 14

Sunfish (A) ~ For approval
Here she is! The bluring just wasn't working with me on Pixlr. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  20:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes, blur the shading/lighting a lot, and lighten the ear pink. If you're using lighting, you may want to add a bit to the tail as well. 21:05, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  21:21, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Upload a new file that has the spelling correct and mark the old one for deletion. And the shading still needs to be blurred a lot more. And by adding depth I mean add a few yellow pixels in the bottom of the eye. 21:34, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't it artists choice for the eyes, Shelly? (sorry, have a memory block) Tone down the earpink. And if you want, you can go here to see the shading placements. ^-^ 21:43, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

I know. It was just a suggestion. 21:52, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Pixlr's blurring hates me. No matter how much I blur I need more. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  01:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste by her face. This still needs blurred tons more. Do you have your blur tool set on 100%? 02:48, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the waste. I might be getting GIMP this Sunday so I'll try then about the blurring (And yes it is on 100%) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F  i<font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t  <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:16, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you use Gaussian Blur for the shading? It's in the filter part of pixlr. 22:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is still some waste by the face. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  01:20, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

How do I use the guassin blur. It just makes everything all blurry. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:26, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Are you using layers, Firestar? . 18:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also lighten the eyes. They look brown. 20:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I am using layers. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  21:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''RE-UPLOADED. '''This is horrible. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  21:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just lighten the shading to make it look not so two-toned and remove the waste. 22:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:59, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down all of the highlights, smudge the pelt into the earpink, make the nose dark grey, and remove the highlights from the back paws and the chest and add some on the front paws. You might need to re-do this if the highlights become too blotchy. 03:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''RE-UPLOADED. '''There isnt much to do about the highlights because they aren't highlights. That's how the guassian blur makes it look. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Then tone down the shading a lot 22:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

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Lighten the whole thing a bit and smudge the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:29,

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Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more and blur it. <span style="">01:32 Wed Dec 14

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Oatpaw (A) - For Approval
I am very proud of this <3. :3. Comments? Elorisa  01:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

You should be. :) There is waste around the charart, and blur the tail shading. 01:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Would this get a charart? All we know is that he's a "dark tom", and we can't just copy the grayscale from a comic... 04:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteclaw got one and he was also mentioned as a dark tom. I think he should. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Just...dust and echoes 07:45, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

He does appear to be almost black in the image he is shown in; I'll tweak him a tad, but I think he should get one :3. Elorisa  13:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I concede that. Go nuts. 14:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. <span style="">00:51 Sat Dec 10

I can see waste between the whiskers and possibly under the chin area. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 07:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. 19:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ -- Elorisa   21:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">22:40 Sat Dec 10

Blur the highlight(?) on the back leg. <span style="">11:55 Tue Dec 13

Firestar(A) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Not my best. Comments? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think he should be short haired. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make him match the leader image. 02:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur his markings more and define the shading. Smudge the pelt into the earpink 02:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I made him short-haired and I'll do everything else in the morning. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. RE-UPLOADED. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match the leader better. <span style="">00:55 Sat Dec 10

And blur where the belly meets the ginger. 02:00, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna withdraw this. I'm not quite ready for Firestar yet. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  03:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. I'll reuploaded this ASAP. 17:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Sandstorm. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  17:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Uploaded Okay I re-did the stripes the best I could and I also tweaked a few other things. 17:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, lighten the stripes, belly, and earpink, and make the stripes match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded okay I color picked off of his leader image and I did my very best with the stripes. 18:12, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the belly to the pelt. 18:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded I smudged it a touch too. Changes not showing. 18:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

You probably took the colors from the shaded part of the image, cause the stripes are still too dark. Lighten them. And they don't really match the leader image still.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:37, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took it from the non-shaded part of the image. Okay, I looked at the Firestar leader image and I mached it to the best of my ability okay? It matches it the way I see it. 18:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and make the stripes sharper at the ends. 19:32, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pale belly come to a point instead of being round at the top  19:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry, but it doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">23:06 Sat Dec 10

Add shading and highlights. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  04:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, she just has to add shading. She can add highlights if she wants to, but it's not necessary. 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sorry.

Reuploaded Okay Ivystripe gave me a redline. Better? 18:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's fine, Firestar ;3 And yes, Better Sandstorm. Define the shading even more and blur together the markings. 18:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Give all of the credit to Ivystripe. 19:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading more and the stripes still need to be lightened a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stripes fail :P 01:29, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add more stripes to make it look like the other images and blur the shading so that it blends more into the unshaded parts. 01:34, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Those are the right amount of stripes. I should know since I did all but his leader image (if I had done the leader I would have done the stripes differently) 01:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you for referencing Ivystripe 02:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Alright. Blur the lighter part of his fur a bit more. 02:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. 23:37, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ For Approval
My first drawing in this Wiki :3 What do you think about Featherwhisker? :3 - Starforce StarClan 11:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit I think.... 12:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? xD Starforce StarClan 12:56, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Only 35 images can be on this page. This is the 36th one. 12:57, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I'm not very often at this Wiki^^ - Starforce StarClan 12:59, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes and hes longhaired and not a she-cat, change it for next time ,13:31,December 9,2011 (UTC)

I'm removing the decline, as the page limit has just become 50. Make him long furred. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

And male. 15:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you just made my day <3 Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. 19:47, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tweaked the heading so no one will get confused. Define the nose colour. 20:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, as you didn't when asked before. :3 16:45, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be uploaded here. 16:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadet and also saved in Featherwhisker.mca.png, sry i didn't read this about the earpink ^^ - Starforce StarClan 16:51, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights if you use them, and if not, just darken the whole image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:53, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the nose should be dark grey. 21:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''re-uploadet. @Paleclaw, sorry I don't understand what you mean, I'm not so good at english :/. I used now to make the shading a little bit darker ^^ - Starforce StarClan 21:41, December 10, 2011 (UTC)'''

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, but the head shading looks alright. <span style="">07:08, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Smooth the shading specifically along the back. 23:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make his whiskers longer to fit his description. 03:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

re-uploadet - Starforce StarClan 18:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Willowpelt (A) ~ For Approval
I quite like Willowpelt :) 15:19, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but thicken the shading until it matches the warrior image. 15:22, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 15:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing 15:36, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smudge the ear pink. 23:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, sigh...darn blur tool :\ every time I don't use layers my chararts stink, but every time I do use layers with this blank it changes the placement! Raaaawrrrrr 00:46, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I decided to completely redo it, please don't tell me to lighten it because Pixlr's being annoying :\ I'll try if you ask but no promises I can completely fix it... 12:35, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her a lot and try and make the shading like on of the ones in the Apprentice Tutorial. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink please. <span style="">01:33 Wed Dec 14

Dovewing (A) ~ For Approval
Not sure i like this... 15:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make her lighter. Take the colors right from her warrior image. 15:26, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I did take the colors straight from her but gaussian blur broke her :( So I simply had to dodge it. REUPLOADED, changes aren't showing, I think :P 15:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink please. Also correct me if I'm worng but the shading looks like it's in the wrong places, kind of like just a big streak going across her body. Look at the shading placement in the apprentice tutorials if you need help. <span style="">22:43, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Yes it is wrong. There needs to be shading onher back hanch and across her spine should be shading not highlights. Just making things specific :3 <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I suggest taking a look here for where the shading goes. <span style="">23:35 Fri Dec 9

The eyes don't look pale golden to me...did you take that from her warrior? Make sure you add depth to her eyes as well  20:10, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes as well. 20:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't the eye style artists choice? 02:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Eye style is but shading an eye isn't style. Without shading it just looks flat and that's not realistic. 04:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Message from Loudy(I'm Loudy's real life friend): I'll reupload it as soon as possible.

Ah, okay. Sorry for the mishap. (and sorry that I am posting nonsense comments right now xD)  20:20, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">12:07 Tue Dec 13

Um....Blue here, Loudy needed me to get on her computer and upload this because she has a softball tournament today. 12:48, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Either the base pelt or shading needs to be lightened, me thinks. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 03:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ CBA
Okay, so before you begin your horrific screams, just want to say one thing... I know the earpink is kind of hot pinkish, but I got it off the elder image, but if people agree that it should be changed, then it shall be changed. ^-^ 20:35, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that bad, Misty. Make the stripes match the elder image and make the color more like the elder...that one has more of an orange tint to it. 21:25, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I took the colors off of her elder picture, and I got rid of the highlights. (bleh) I'll work on the stripes a bit, but do you know how to blur them like they are shown on the elders image?? 21:53, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I don't. If you're stuck, go as Bloo, the artist of Rosetail's wonderful elder image. xD 21:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her tail and make her body stripes bit small and add some more of them. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 00:11, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes, and Scarletwind, Rosetail doesn't have stripes on her tail on her other images. 02:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Kind of redoing to look more like her other pictures, so I will probably uploaded the picture tomorrow when I'm done. 02:48, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, I'll upload it now. :P I know she only has a few strips on her, but I counted the ones on the elder image and tried to match them exactly. xD 04:14, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes paler and blur them a little more. 18:22, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know it looks as if I didn't make them paler, but I did. :P 19:43, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

They need to be more pale then, and more orange. 20:05, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I took them off her elder image, though. (I took it off the unshaded part) But if anyone else wants them to be changed, I'll do it. >.< (sorry mentor 3:) 20:30, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the pelt into the ear-pink, the ear-pink looks as if it;s blurred into the pelt. <span style="">00:08 Sun Dec 11

Reuploaded Oh earpink how I hate you so. xD  02:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and darken the shading on the bottom of the belly. Colourpick the non-shaded parts of her other images to get a better sense of what the colour should be like, and try to adapt the stripes so they match better. Darken her eyes as well. <span style="">02:41 Sun Dec 11

Lighten the stripes and make then less brown. and it loks like you used black for shading. If you did, then make it more red. i used this colour  02:47, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? 03:42, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken/define the shading? Neat! <span style="">07:11, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. Thanks! 17:13, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed some colored lineart and eyes.

Me up there.. xD  00:38, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

This should be Scarlet's since she's the OA of the redone version. Do you have her permission to do this? If not, get it, or this will have to be declined I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:07, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, forgot to mention that I got Scarlet's approval before I posted this. :3  01:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

In that case, lighten and blur the stripes a bit, and I'll CBA this. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:40, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the stripes. (didn't lighten them a lot, since I got the colors from her old image) Really want to get this approved. :D  20:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, just noticed something. Did you get the tail color from her other chararts? Cause it doesn't really look the sae color right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:13, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I did... I think the shading is making it look like that. But Bloo told me what color they used for shading... 22:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually I didnt. I used dark pink for the tail xD - 23:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you're having a lot of trouble matching it, ask Bloo to send you the .xcf file. I've done that before with particularly difficult images :3 <span style="">01:25 Wed Dec 14

Smudge th epelt inot th eear-pink. <span style="">01:34 Wed Dec 14

Well poo. xD I'll fix it later. 02:13, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, fixed it. 02:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I love this. CBA? 05:20, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (A) - For Approval
Ta-da! I'm extremely proud of this. Comments? 21:10, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear pink to give it a more realistic look. This is really good, Blossom! 21:12, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

So pretty! Can you make the black spot on the haunch just a tad bit bigger to match the warrior image? 21:15, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! Could you make the earpink a little less purple? If you got it from the warrior image, then nevermind. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  21:24, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. (Lovely Blossom!) <span style="">00:43 Sat Dec 10

Her nose should be dark grey. :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 09:18, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, everyone. :3 -- 13:03, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading even more please  00:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt A.) ~ For Approval
Brackenfur was described as a ginger tom in Fire and Ice when he was an apprentice. Took the ear color for his warrior image. Comments? 21:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Realized I used the female lineart xD Removed the eyelash thing, but the changes aren't showing. 21:29, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little (as in color-wise) and blur the edges of them some more 21:40, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:54, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

The back leg looks highlighted instead of shaded. I don't know if it was intentially but I'm just pointing it out. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:09, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for what the shading should look like, and saturate the image a bunch. <span style="">01:05 Sat Dec 10

I used the shading placement guide wildheart. The gaussian blur just made it look weird. 02:04, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the shading a tad and saturated the image. 12:17, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading just a tad more. 20:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:25, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes a tad. 02:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:17, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) ~ For Approval
Hmm, I love Bluestar :) All colours are from her other images. Comments? <span style="">21:31 Fri Dec 9

Blur the ear pink more. 21:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ^-^ Looks good, Sweet! 21:44, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fail on the ear-pink xD I will start on the darkening it shadin' in a moment.<span style="">21:48 Fri Dec 9

On my computer, it shows/looks like there is some more waste around the charart. 22:14, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded *Jumps up and down* Did I kill it? I think I did. :D <span style="">22:26 Fri Dec 9

If you didn't already, add shading to the ear on the left. (It just looks unshaded on my computer.) <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:30, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Our left? Or the cats left? <span style="">22:38 Fri Dec 9

The cats left. XD But it's just a suggestion. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:41, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies. Stupid edit conflicts! <span style="">23:04 Fri Dec 9

The nose should be gray. 15:55, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a shadow to the back of her haunch. You're doing phenomenal my awesome apprentice <3  20:08, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

A shadow? <span style="">22:43 Sat Dec 10

Shading, I don't know how to explain it further XD That part would be darker because of the light source. 23:35, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'll I needed was to her the word shading ;) Re-uploaded Added a grayy nose and "shading" to the back of the haunch.. <span style="">23:47 Sat Dec 10

Does she have the same color nose like her other images? 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her nose is pink on the other images, but I was told to make it gray, do I make it pink than? <span style="">23:20 Sun Dec 11

The nose is a lighter gray on her other images. Color pick off of that, if you'd like. 23:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Got the nose colour off her kit image. <span style="">00:52 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded Smudges ear-pink more. <span style="">00:55 Mon Dec 12

Her ear should be torn. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 06:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when she got the torn ear, do we? Meaning she probably shouldn't have it on her apprentice. Darken the shading and make the shading color match the leader image better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, Sky's right, she got it as an apprentice. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:03, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I love this images, so proud :) <span style="">23:00 Mon Dec 12

Add a silver tip to the tail. 14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got the colour off her leader image, so I'm probably not changing it. <span style="">21:27 Tue Dec 13

Actually, she shouldn't have a silver tail tip. That's from age. Could you get rid of it and darken the shading? Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploadedThat's fine, I don't mind xD <span style="">00:04 Wed Dec 14

Blur the earpink and add depth to the eye. I love the shading, Sweet! 06:06, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (A) - For Approval
I think I can do this. Alright, I'm really proud of this charart. Please do tell me if something is wrong with it. I adore Whitestorm, so I like that I can do his apprentice charart. <span style="">22:33, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

There seems to be some white pixels in his ears. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:37, December 9, 2011 (UTC) Also make his ears feathered like his deputy image. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:42, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if the ear's should be like the deputy charart because he is older then and has been in more battles, and it's not like that in the warrior image. The white pixels on the ear is the smudged pelt color into the earpink, unless you want me to change that. <span style="">22:53, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

That would probably work if the earpink had white all around it and you're right if the warrior charart doen't have it then the apprentice charart doesn't need it. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:55, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I see what you mean now by the white pixels. <span style="">22:59, Fri, Dec, 9, 2011

Darn, I was hoping to get this after Badgerpaw was done. XD Anyways we he actually got the scar as an apprentice, but since we don't know at what point, and you can't see the back of the ear anyways, I'd say forget about it. Can you darken the shading. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:17, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have tufted ears, too? Bluestar11796 23:20, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't mention what was already said, Bluestar. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  23:23, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Mmmm xD. Okay, but you can't really see the scar on the warrior image anyway. <span style="">00:03, Sat, Dec, 10, 2011

Define the shading. <span style="">00:11 Sat Dec 10

Don't berate Bluestar for stating what needed to be done, Firestar. It hadn't been mentioned before. She's right: this does need tufted ears. Blur and darken the shading a bit. Lovely job, apprentice ;) <span style="">01:11 Sat Dec 10

I already said it needed feathered ears. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  02:52, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

But then DJ said something about it not needing them, and it wasn't fixed on the next upload. Bluestar has every right to say that. Don't get bossy, apprentice. She was only making a point, and a good one at that. The warrior charart probably wasn't tweaked yet, and that's why it doesn't have the ears. 06:25, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, just so lightly! <span style="">13:32 Sat Dec 10

Reuploaded -  Fail on the tufts. <span style="">06:59, Sun, Dec, 11, 2011

Make the tufts taller and not contain earpink. Right now his ears look torn in three pieces. Just add it on top of the lineart  18:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you're having trouble, just copy Iceheart's lineart on Redtail. <span style="">06:23 Mon Dec 12

Blossomfall (A) ~ For Approval
I know it needs work, let the comments begin 23:46, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's pretty, Wildfire. ^^ Just try to match the pattern from the warrior image a bit more closely. There should be more white patches, and the white patches should be smaller. 23:49, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the patches are too shiny, daken them (or lower the layer's opacity) please. <span style="">00:04 Sat Dec 10

Darken the shading as well. 00:16, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid all the spots, and darkend the shading 04:15, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

She looks, messed up... -- 04:49, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Crap this is a male template, I stole it from Firestar's apprentice version, back to GIMP. 05:02, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:58, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't have a white belly, just a white chest from what I see on the warrior charart. - 17:21, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

No I looked and it's fine. She has a white belly too. It's just not connected. 20:06, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the white patches, they're still too shiny. <span style="">23:00 Sat Dec 10

What do you mean too shiny? They're supposed to stand out a little. 01:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm debating if I should withdraw this and let someone more experienced try it, would anyone like to redo her? 03:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Keep her, my apprentice. She's looking wonderful! Try to darken the white patches a little by... Hmm... Maybe adding a little bit of shading to them, and lower to opacity of the layer so it's faint, but so the patches aren't so bright. 04:06, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, this is lovely work and Cloudy is right. Maybe try add hightlinks and..just play with it :-) 17:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes mentor, I'll try. 19:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Add a shadow to the back hindquarter becuase of the light source. <span style="">20:07 Sun Dec 11

Shading** <span style="">20:12 Sun Dec 11

Reuploaded 20:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Umm.. this hasn't been commented on for three days... 23:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the patch on her back haunch. <span style="">00:06 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded Oh and sorry about the other comment I just really want to get Whitewing. And get this done 03:37, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather (A) - For Approval
Crowfeather. *squee* I luff him so much, so I had to make him look as good as I possibally could at midnight. All colors stolen from his warrior image, except for the nose color, which came from his kit image. Comments? 05:44, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! =3 Define the shading. 07:28, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the shading a bit more if possible. Purplemoon  We wish you a Perry Christmas...  17:33, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:59, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the pelt is too blurred into the ear-pink. Make the ear-pink bigger where the pelt is blurred into it. <span style="">00:04 Sun Dec 11

reuplaoded 16:54, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail bases' shading. <span style="">02:16 Wed Dec 14

Petaldust (A) - CBA
comments? 00:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a white chest? :3 00:13, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fail. Yes, she's also longhaired and a female. So I'll reupload this tonight/tomorrow. *headdesk* 00:16, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the brindle patches brighter 00:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also redden the earpink and darken the black. Pretty. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I think I got it all right concerning lineart and what not... =P 17:16, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. (if any) 18:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Mm, and make the orangy whatever colour brighter. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 22:32, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The brown/orange still needs to be a bit brighter, the black needs to be darkened, the earpink reddened, and the eyes should be blur. XD Darn edit conflicts. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Best I can do to match with her warrior image. And eyes blurred, excuse me? O.o 23:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes BLUE. Sorry. XD Fail. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:39, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. XD 23:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste near the ear farthest away from us. :3 01:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Waste... >.> XD 01:40, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The pelt needs to be blurred like the warrior more. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 20:44, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred. 06:06, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Let's go CBA on this  05:21, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MCA) ~ For Approval
First tortie, comments? 01:14, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">01:29 Sun Dec 11

Also, smudge it into the earpink. 01:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add dapples. Pretty. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the nose. xD 02:01, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fail with the dapples. -- 02:08, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the belly's shading a tad. 12:37, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image, there are dapples. Fail. Dx 17:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink a wee bit. *steals* <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 22:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Copperpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad 18:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red. 19:39, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Copperpaw is technically mine, since I did the original...would you mind if I took over, or would you like to continue? 22:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if you want it, you can have it.. 02:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

But isn't Sandstar the OA?.. 02:23, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, this is perfect. Ivy might as well keep it cause I'm gonna CBA it. 04:19, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but she's RiverClan, so she should be long haired. I'll CBA again when you do that. 09:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

(^Me) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  15:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How could I forget she was in RiverClan? Ah, oh well. Converting it wasn't hard. 04:29, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

CBA'ing this for Icy ^^ Nicely done btw 05:22, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Ivy, but the top of the tail's cut off for some reason. Fix that and I'll reset the 24 hours. <span style="">07:59 Wed Dec 14

Hazeltail (A) ~ For Approval
I just realized I forgot the earpink... Derp. I'll fix that. Comments? 16:38, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fill in the nose and lighten the chest and belly shading a tad. 18:16, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. 'I did ''fill in the nose, it's a darker shade of gray than the patches. 20:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. <span style="">02:20 Tue Dec 13

Cinderpelt (MCA) ~ For Approval
I took all of the colors (except the nose X3) from her mc. I kinda like it. Comments? 16:45, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The broken paw should curl a little bit more, like in her other images. And make the nose dark grey. 16:55, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define ear-pink on →→ this ear ,16:57,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed the nose, ear, and foot :). 17:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Poor Cinderpelt. Blur the shading to make it blend in more with either the highlights or the unshaded parts. Nice job with the lineart! 18:24, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you. I think this is a blurred as I can get it. :) 19:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Her ankle joint looks swollen. make that part a little smaller.I know it's supposed to be twisted but it just looks kind of awkward right now 20:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the ankle thinner and changed a little of the lineart on the leg. 21:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the toes less long and make the paw a bit smaller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:43, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Wow this is taking longer than Lionheart. Fixed the paw. O.o 14:53, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink on her right side. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 03:40, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Made earpink lighter. 04:16, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Olivenose (A) - For Approval
''Yes! Free space!!!'' Comments? 16:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-upload it correctly, and use the right lineart. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 16:52, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Regi, she did, the changes just haven't showed yet. 16:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ginger lighter like it was in her old apprentice, right now it's too ginger 18:07, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually Ivy, it's fine. If anything it needs to be saturated a bit more. The old one didn't match her warrior image exactly. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:33, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The places where you smudged looks way to sharp. Blur it a little bit. Darken the shading the tiniest bit. 02:09, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The smudged areas are sharp like that on the warrior image. 03:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink and ginger patches a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  06:01, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:02, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 16:54, December 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * P *eats Stoney* Me wanted Cinderpelt. >.< So cute. :3 Blur the shading to blend more into the unshaded (or highlighted) parts. 17:11, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">23:36 Sun Dec 11

Fill in or darken the nose. I wanted her to. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  14:59, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (A) - For Approval
Hmm, I must practice shadings more ,16:51,December 11,2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. Just make the nose pink, since white cats have pink noses. 16:57, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I like the shading, too. Cute! And, the deputy version has green eyes. :3 16:58, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its not green, but blue (Im going to tweak it and pre-made him). And I dont like white cats with blue eyes... Reuploaded ,17:00,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry. =3 My bad. My eyes are obviously not very good. Blur the earpink. 17:04, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its ok, that eye is really small xD Reuploaded ,17:07,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Make the nose more pink. 19:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,20:30,December 11,2011 (UTC)

His eye colour should match the original image. Change it to blue. 02:15, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

NO ONE understands me there ,20:59,December 14,2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) - For Approval
I'm EXTREMELY proud of this one. Comments? 17:15, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is lovely! Can you define a pale underbelly a tad please?*like it!* ,17:19,December 11,2011 (UTC)

And add the pale belly to his belly, like between the haunch and foreleg. :3 17:21, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:19, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a smidge. <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:49, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste all around it. 00:51, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I too see the waste. Dull the ear pink a touch and the herbs look like it's all...different colors. I know I'm being blunt, but it just looks unatural and odd. 02:13, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, its the same color as the one on the medicine cat image. And the herbs can be any color, I think. (has the same herbs on his medicine cat image, too) 02:33, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

You matched his MC wonderfully, Snow. Define the shading just a tad though. 15:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink into the ear some more? ^^ . 22:55, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:14, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source on his shoulder and don't have the back of his hindpaw that is furthest from us have a light part on the back of it. 00:54, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (A) ~ For Approval
Yay! My first charart I like it! =) Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 17:28, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and stripes. 17:29, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, rename this Owlwhisker.apprentice.png and smudge the earpink. 17:30, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency ,17:32,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading for you. Add more shading too, and make the stripes a tad bigger to match the other image. 17:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Ivy, i wanted to do it xD Yes Acorn, also add more stripes and made them more real, i never seen before a cat with such less stripes. Warrior version is going do be tweaked, i think :-) ,17:37,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you Ivy. Geez I've drawn a blank how do you add transparency? Changes aren't showing. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 17:59, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you're using GIMP, select the white areas, then go to edit---> clear. If it doesn't become transparent then go to Layers--->Transparency--->add alpha channel 18:05, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken stripes and add more lighter of them and made M stripe on the head. ,18:12,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Can someone blur the shading for me? GIMP isn't working at the moment. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:12, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstorm can you make the transparency for me? Its not working for me. =/ Acornflight   Med. Cat of LunarClan! 21:48, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added light highlights, does it look okay? Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan!  23:46, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

i make it transparent when you get CBA it, darken the shadings more ,16:12,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Unfortunately, we can't CBA if it's not transparent. But don't worry, I've done it for you :) Blur the shading/highlights. 00:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Yeah, it's not that great, I know. Let me know right away if there's something up with it. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 17:31, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I removed the thumbnail for you. Redden the earpink, and define the shading. 17:32, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

She needs to have a gray/black nose. Maybe take the earpink from her kittypet charart. 17:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, smudge the earpink. 17:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-name this Birdpaw.apprentice.png. 17:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency ,17:36,December 11,2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''The stupid blur tool is being a butt.could someone help me? And I don't know how to add transperency. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 18:00, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I made it transparent ,18:08,December 11,2011 (UTC)

Ty. I just noticed, does she need a scar? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 18:22, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm guessing that she should have two apprentice images, one with it and one without. 19:14, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Would that mean that she needs an alt for that, like Brightheart with her injuries? ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:17, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

No she just gets one with a scar. Add the scar. 19:34, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Added the scar. Looks good? Also, the blur tool hates me D;. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 19:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

My eyes are betraying me today (Leafstorm XD) but is there shading on this image? 20:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">20:35 Sun Dec 11

Make the scar a little.. thinner. It looks fat right now. Purplemoon <font color="FF6699">Three Advent candles lighted  20:41, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add transparency again. 21:53, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the scar. Yes there's shading. No, it's not blurred. My blur tool won'te blur it. And Idk how to do transperency, first i've heard of it. ~Regifloat222 Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 01:09, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Transparency is where you get rid of the white background. And define the shading. (or darken it)  01:41, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as though there's alot of extra space. Crop it. ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 20:46, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Birdpaw.apprentice.png. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink. <span style="">02:37 Tue Dec 13

Lighten the base colour, then darken the shading. I can barely even see the lineart. 00:28, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Littlecloud (MCA) ~ For Approval
Just realized that I named the file wrong. xD I'll fix it in a second. I took everything from his medicine cat image. 18:03, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the shading on the herbs, and the tail shading. 18:08, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the file named and defined the herb shading and tail shading. 18:20, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

His nose looks very dark 01:36, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

His description says he has a brown nose, and I took it from his medicine cat image. 01:42, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

He looks a bit ginger to me. 03:18, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I took all of the colors off of his medicine cat image. (made sure they were the unshaded parts) 20:04, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken and/or define the shading a tad? He looks kinda flat. ~Breezewhisker~ 00:35, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink more. <span style="">02:33 Tue Dec 13

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. I think the earpink is fine, in my opinion. But if anyone else agrees, I'll change it.. 02:41, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well it could be blurred a bit, but I think the smudging's fine. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:45, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. ^-^  21:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the eyes. <span style="">01:20 Wed Dec 14

Rubblepaw (A) ~ For Approval
So here he is. Rubblepaw. I rather like this one....so comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:23, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

The eye closest to us looks kind of reddish. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Gold>Firestar will rule all the Clans forever! :)  22:26, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you. Blur the highlights so it blends in with the shading. 22:33, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Fire, i made his eyes amber, they are the same color; however, i'll try to fi it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:36, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops haha NOW I fixed the title XD sorry! 22:40, December 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * Edit Conflict xD* Reuploaded-Better? Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:44, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

That's not amber, it's orange. Make it more yellowy. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:57, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I figured his eyes were described as amber, but he doesn't have an eye color, so you can keep it orange. :P Blur the shading/highlights though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:58, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the eyes nevertheless xD. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, will do. xD Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:39, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink more, there's this random ear-pink edge on > this end. Can you erase the ear-pink there and make it part of the pelt? <span style="">00:33 Tue Dec 13

That's how its supposed to be..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

No, Sweet's right. It's too far into the pelt. <span style="">01:16 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. A) - CBA
Comments? 03:17, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <3 05:15, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. :3 20:05, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

This description of him needs to be cited before this gets approved. Sorry. 04:01, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

There used to be a cite for it on his page, I know I added it, I'm sure it's in the pages history somewhere. -- 04:12, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, I found it; it's on there now. 00:20, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cited, no art commetns since the 12th, this needs to be on CBA asap =) Brilliant work Oblivion!  05:24, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Runningbrook (A) - For Approval
Well, I tried ,16:46,December 12,2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Darken the shading a tad. 23:11, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the shading on the back of the back xD <span style="">23:37 Mon Dec 12

Reuploaded,18:51,December 13,2011 (UTC)

The paws are darken than everything else, wither make the shading darker everywhere but the paws, or make the paws lighter please. <span style="">02:11 Wed Dec 14

Crookedstar (A) - For Approval
He's one of my favourite characters, so why not? I took all the colours from the leader image, and also made the stripes consistent with the same leader image. I also kind of need help with the crooked jaw. Comments? 18:33, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Have the top of the mouth curve up and in a little bit, also, possibly have the bottom of the jaw come up and over to the left (his right) more. Possibly add a very dark red to the inside of the mouth. Hope this helps since I worked on making his jaw the way it is. 18:39, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried. 20:50, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

The inside of animal's mouths isn't white. Change it to dark red. 01:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tooth smaller. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:12, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oblivion: The white is the tooth. :) 18:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tooth a little smaller. Good job on the jaw. 03:41, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *-* 18:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Breezepelt (A)- CBA
Hmm. <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 18:54, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights (if any) a tad and blur the shading. :3 20:24, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Usually I do, but not on this one. :3 <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 20:32, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the shading on the belly/that general area is much to dark, one spot on the belly looks like the lineart melts into the shading. :S Other than that, I see nothing wrong and it looks wonderful. ^^ . 22:50, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How bout now? ^^ <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 22:56, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Defone the shading on the tail. <span style="">23:27 Mon Dec 12

Re-uploaded. <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="pink" >Sky <font face="Constantias" size="2" color="orange">☀Surfin' Santa ☀ 23:35, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect! Comments before approval? 02:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower (A)~For Approval
Comments? 21:34, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is lovely! 02:33, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 05:01, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more and I'll CBA. :) This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (A) ~ For approval
Got all colors from original image. CommentS? 23:15, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">23:20 Mon Dec 12

Re-Uploaded. 23:23, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bunch and darken it. <span style="">01:09 Wed Dec 14

Re-Uploaded. 01:18, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Mottlepaw (A) - For Approval
I just love my dual colours! Comments? 02:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Of course! I look away form the approval page for a minute, and *BAM* I lost a spot xD Define the shadin, and smudge th epelt inot the ear-pink a bit more. <span style="">02:14 Tue Dec 13

Re-uploaded. 00:29, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches a lot so they're less dramatically smudged. Looks good ^^ <span style="">01:08 Wed Dec 14

Re-uploaded. :D 01:26, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) ~ For Approval
My goodness! The page isn't at 50!? Anyway, here she is. -.- *Highly Dislikes* It's going to need a lot of work! D:. 04:50, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! ^^ Add stripes to the tail though. :P ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  07:47, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wow! :D Maybe blur the patches a bit more? (I am horrible at noticing this stuff) 08:41, December 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * bops thistley* 'tis beautiful~ :3. Smudge the earpink into the pelt more.  Elorisa   13:38, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I fixed the tail once, and then it looked dull, so I changed the color of the stripes and added some extra shading to the tail too. . 14:30, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the black on the far side of the cheek and make the borwn on this side bigger. If you look at her kit charart, the darker fur is around the eye closest to us, and it's brown, not black. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (A) - For Approval
Comments? <span style="">07:30, Tue, Dec, 13, 2011

I love this! Make the stripes wavy like his warrior image. <span style="">11:48 Tue Dec 13

It's a bit darker than his other images. Could you lighten it up a bit? 14:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. <span style="">08:01, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

Make the stripes a bit thinner on the head and body but not the tail or ankles. Those look perfect. Also give his highlights a tiny bit of a golden-yellow tint like his warrior. Great job! 15:32, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. A) - For Approval
As stated in Long Shadows, Tigerpaw compared his golden pelt to Lionblaze's. But this is messy...not the best I could've done. (Sorry, the first one I uploaded was using my friend's account that she left logged in) 08:32, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, sorry. Declined for now, but you can repost when there's space. When you do rpost, make it match the warrior alt. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  09:15, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'll remove the decline. ;) I just cleaned up the CBAs. 14:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redden/pinkin the earpink, tone down and smooth out the highlights, darken the eyes to pick outf from the pelt, color in the nose and darken the shading ;3 20:45, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

He looks yellow, and his stripes look almost green, maybe take the colors from Lionblaze, or Lionheart? Or from his alt Warrior. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah this needs to match his warrior alt. <span style="">23:22 Tue Dec 13

No, Wild they don't. The artist can do it however they want. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:51, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Maple, if he was described the wrong pelt color exactly the same twice, then yes, they must match. 00:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the ear-pink. <span style="">01:15 Wed Dec 14

Yeah he looks yellowish and smudge/blur the stripes 03:46, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Don't let the highlights get the better of the pelt color if that makes sence. <span style="">08:06, Wed, Dec, 14, 2011

I think what DJ means is to dull the highlights and blend them with the pelt more. 20:19, December 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Quickpaw (A) ~ For Approval
I really like how he came out. :3 Comments? 14:57, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is supposed to be Mistystar's I believe. Do you have her permission? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:00, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

We decided not to use that system. It's first come, first serve. 15:02, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

In any case, Misty isn't the OA. Icethroat is. 15:03, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

When did we decide this? I've heard nothing of it. And Misty redid it, so it's technically hers. If you redo, it's yours. Looks at the list, it's listed under her name. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:11, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Here. And Misty didn't redo it, she only added stripes to the old image. 15:14, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Revise that. It isn't totally first come first serve, but you can claim rights to a couple of your original images if you please. But people can put them up for approval in any case. It's only if the OA asks for it that it becomes theirs. 15:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fine. Is this discussion linked to anywhere? If not, it should be linked on the talk page, because none of the project will know about it otherwise. And just to clarify, she DID redo it, I checked the tweak archives and it said Redone. Anyways, make it a bit less yellow. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moving on from that. >.> She mislabeled it, I think... nothing was changed but the stripes. 15:25, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you redden the earpink, since it looks grey right now? 18:06, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

They're brown, an appropriate color for this type of cat. However if someone else agrees I shall change it. 02:11, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

i agree, they look grey,make them pink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:55, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'll change them, but not to pink. 04:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made the inner ears more brown than gray. 19:47, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nettlepaw (RC) (A) - For Approval
Since he only has one image, I figured I could do whatever I want with the stripes. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  14:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Love his eyes! 21:58, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you. ^^ But if I lighten the shading it will look flat. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:05, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! shorten the earpink in the left ear a tad. It seems to go right down his head. 19:50, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Heavystep (A) - For Approval
All colors are from his elder and warrior image, so don't tell me to change them. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:59, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is just a preference, but could you thicken his legs a tiny bit? I mean, obviously it'd be a noticeable trait since he's named for it. 16:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure what Thickset means, but I don't think it means he has big paw/legs, does it? Cause if not, it's not in his description, and we can't change it. It'd be like giving Lionblaze a mane like Lionheart just cause of his name. So unless thickset means big legs, no, I'm not changing them. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:10, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

I was talking about "stocky" actually. When referring to an animal, stocky usually means that said cat has thick legs. 16:37, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm.... I don't think that's really enough to add. If someone else thinks I should, I'll add them, but I'd rather not for now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:52, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm...Define the shading a little. 02:54, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink on <--- this ear. 20:14, December 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Shadepelt (A) - For Approval
Please don't say about the color, I had a hard time :( Grayflower10 16:18, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are you a member of the PCA? I don't see your name on the apprentice list.... And if I understand right, you can't post chararts unless you're a member. You can go join though. Anyways, lighten the whole image and get rid of the white specks on the head. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:21, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

The front page of PCA says that non-members can donate art. And Gray actually reserved it, so it's fine I think. ^^ She's the first non-member I've seen do the thing right. 16:40, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I did ask to join :) Grayflower10 17:09, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fill those two white pixels on her forehead? 18:04, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

And smudge the pelt into the earpink. 18:05, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading placement like the one on the tutorial. Som eof the placements are wrong. <span style="">02:09 Wed Dec 14

Shading placement is the artist's choice, Sweetflower. As long as it makes sense, we can't tell anyone to make it match the tutorial. 02:59, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please make the earpink look pink. 19:49, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Frecklewish (A) - For Approval
If Icy wants this, she can have it since she originally did it. Took all the colors from her kittypet charart. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 18:16, December 13, 2011 (UTC)

-Dies of the awesomeness of this charart- Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. <span style="">00:12 Wed Dec 14

Re-uploaded. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:12, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Put mottles in her fur. I can see them on the kittypet pixil though I think they need to be tweaked. 05:27, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sunstrike (A) - For Approval
Comments for improvement? And no I don't think the shading is too dark, her shading is pretty dark in her warrior image 00:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the markings a ton and add more orange to her body. 00:58, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Did you have to take the last spot on the approval page? xD Define the tail shading. I love this mentor! <span style="">01:05 Wed Dec 14

Reuploaded I'm sorry, Sweet =( And I believe there is the same amount of orange on both images  04:20, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the markings a bit more and blur the earpink. This is lovely. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  08:47, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? 15:35, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Lighten the left earpink a bit. 19:44, December 14, 2011 (UTC)