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Featherwhisker (Ki) ~ For Approval
^^ I'm anxious for all the ways I can improve! I like how this charart turned out, I think it looks nice. 15:34, November 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, and maybe add another layer of shading at a lower opacity to create some depth? 16:52, 11/28/2014

Changing heading and promoting you since you know what you're doing.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the good advice! 20:45, November 28, 2014 (UTC) Define the light a bit more on the leg to our left? This is wonderful 21:05, 11/28/2014

The shading is leaking away on the tail... Also, define ur light source plz. But this is good! :) Burntclaw (talk) 01:09, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded this art is 2cute <333 love it 16:06, November 29, 2014 (UTC)

Still can't see the shading on that left leg. Define it a bit more? 03:46, 11/30/2014

I can see it perfectly fine. Burntclaw (talk) 10:34, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

I'm agreeing with Ferk, I can't see it. 14:12, December 2, 2014 (UTC)

oh my I should be re-uploading tomorrow. I haven't had much time to use the computer, but I should be able to soon. 03:50, December 3, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long! 01:26, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. I can't see where the light it coming from. -_- Burntclaw (talk) 10:01, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it clearly, it's fine. 14:09, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the (his left) lower side, between the foreleg and the back paw. It's a little dark. Nice! 15:40, December 4, 2014 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. 14:26, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:07, December 6, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the highlight on the left foreleg, please.-- 04:08, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color to match the other images? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:30, December 7, 2014 (UTC)

The base colors with this image and his other images match perfectly, so I think it's fine. 13:49, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Should be uploading soon. Not sure when, because school computers block WWiki. Saturday at the latest. 20:48, December 8, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, are you still working, Gia?

Yep, I am. I just haven't been able to use the computer, otherwise I would have uploaded before now. 01:53, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. finally 15:41, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Dull and blur the highlights, please.-- 00:45, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:51, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing. 19:21, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

They're showing for me. I don't know what the problem is, if it's on your end or what... 17:27, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the light on <-- visible leg.

Re-uploaded 14:37, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded fixing shading 14:40, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Is it my screen, or is there a square on her chest? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:52, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

I'm trying to fix that. 15:46, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. gosh 15:53, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. WAAASTEEE also featherwhisker is a dood 15:56, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs? You're doing great! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:56, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. i just want this to be approved tbh 16:20, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Don't worry you're getting there. Blur all the shading a bunch, and lighten it a shade or two on the right side > 20:10, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. mmm delicious shading 03:57, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading, that's all I can say about this lovely image right now ^^ you did a brilliant job. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:20, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Also, is the shading layer above the eyes? Because the eyes seem to have shading too. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:21, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, it is. Do you want me to fix that? 23:15, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:19, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading; it’s also leaking away from the lineart. Also, can you put the lineart above the rest? It’s supposed to be pure black. Other than that, this is so adorable! --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Im sorry, but i think this will most likely be declined soon due to the one month limit =(.-- 06:00, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Although you're right, please keep in mind, Breezeheart, that saying that is not your place. A project lead are the only users allowed to say that- just like asking if you're still working, CBA'ing, ect. Sorry, Gia, I don't have a choice.

Uploaded. Finding my own unique shading style..I think I finally found it. Well gonna use my dads laptop to do images while on vacation. Comments? 15:56, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading, I can barely see it. it looks so much better than mine ; - ; 16:39, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

IDK why... But why do I think the base color seems very light compared to his other images? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:09, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

The base should be around the range of #BFBFBF. I somehow have one of his files (don't ask, I have a shitton of files lmao), and that's what the base shows for what I have. Also, smooth out the shading- it's rough in some places.

I color picked from the starclanner so the base should be accurate. And the shading is supposed to look like how it is^^ but I'll smudge it a tad more just because it does look a bit odd in some spaces. But I'm trying to find my own style so yeah.. I'll try to re-upload sometime later on. 18:08, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

You haven't uploaded since the 30th- are you still working?

Yes I am. So sorry, I caught the flu that same day I said I'd reupload and I just got better. I'll reupload within the hour or so. 13:27, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Had to redo the whole thing because my dads laptop is not available so had to redo it on my moms..eh don't mind too much though. 14:19, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (Ki) - Declined
Woo~  First white cat (I really hope I did this right I don't wanna redo another charart :/) 11:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define ur light source. The Fox Girl (talk) 11:48, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading up, too. It's making the white look pretty gray. 13:41, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:49, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

She's not supposed to be white. She should be a light color, hence why she looks off-white. The base from the kittypet is #E3E5E2. I'm also gonna rename this for you, since it should be File:Honeypaw (SC).kit.png.

Should I change the pelt color then and reup? 11:17, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

I suggest you to color pick off the apprentice image and just change the base color. The Fox Girl (talk) 13:18, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:04, December 12, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks hard edged, maybe blur it more? Then define it everywhere. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:11, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Meh that would put her back to where she is now. Just blur the edge of the shading dear, that should fix it up and save you a lot of stress. But define the depth just a tad, like darken it where the creases are and where there would be less light. You're doing wonderfully~ 02:33, December 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define your light source. The left paw and main body is telling me its coming from the <--- while the right paw and tail are telling me it's coming from --->. The head could use a little bit of shading, aswell. Perhaps just switch aroound the foreleg shading; or switch the tail or main body shading. 00:34, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Sorry I haven't been uploading recently. School, the upcoming holiday, bleh.. 14:09, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey, just as a head's up, don't align the images. It messes up the sections if too many are done at the same time. Define the light just a bit on <-- front leg.

Reups Gah sorry I must've not been paying attention 14:29, December 18, 2014 (UTC)

Try adding some highlights or something- she's looking a bit on the grey side. This is very nice for a first white cat, though. ^^ 03:14 Fri Dec 19

Nevermind, I didn't see that she's supposed to be light-coloured, not white. Anyways, maybe define the shading just a little?

Reups Sorry about the confusion lol 14:42, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and chest shading a bit. ^^ 19:14, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're both fine, tbh. I can see them both clearly. Can you blur the shading a tad more, please?-- 06:11, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 13:55, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add more light to the tail? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 04:06, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Eh I think it looks fine. If she added more light, someone would tell her to define the shading on it again. 16:58, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think a bit more light wouldn't hurt. It does appear awfully dark.

This has been well over a week without any uploads or replies. I'm sorry, but I have to decline this.

Oh... well I have a new file to upload. Is it too late now? Damn I should've posted as soon as I woke up :( If so I understand. 18:39, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, declined is declined. You won't be able to reupload the new version.

M'kay, understandable. Thanks 19:07, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Dustpelt (Ki) - For Evaluation
Ok, I don't know if chararts can be done in a day, but anyway, this is my first charart! I used PAINT.NET for this one. He's so cute! How can I improve? This is my first charart, so I may not be familiar with everything. BTW, how to make background color disapperar? I had trouble with that. Hope this helps! FireTail101 (talk) 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Sign your posts with four tides plz. To remove the background, select the linear art, copy it, paste it onto ur base color layer, then use the magic wand tool and delete the background with control+x. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 23:58, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

Plz match his other images by adding stripes as well. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:00, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups

The stripes are already there, just dark. U probably couldn't see them because of background. FireTail101 (talk) 00:13, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base color and define the shading. Not bad for ur first charart! If You had seen my first charart, you'd laugh your head off. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:17, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Colour pick from one of the other Dustpelt images. Just be careful not to colour pick a shaded spot. Also with PAINT.NET, I leave the layers and save as a .pdn, then save again as a .png and that will make it one layer, making it easier to edit the waste. I leave the .pdn as multiple layers so I can edit it easier. This is great for first try! --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:21, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Stealthfire, I colourpicked each color from Dustpelt's apprentice image. FireTail101 (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

I still think it's a bit dark. The Fox Girl (talk) 00:27, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

He's way to dark. He looks like a black cat on my screen, tbh. You can use  this to colorpick from; Because right now, he's so dark to the point i cant even see his stripes or lineart.

Use the medium brown on the bottom left as your base; while using the paler brown beside it for his pale parts. The pink is for his ears; and the orange/yellow in the middle is for his eyes. The darkest brown is for his stripes. Also, his nose needs to be black/dark brown to match his other images. 00:30, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reups FireTail101 (talk) 02:08, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define/darken the stripes? I really can't see them. You're doing well! :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! Sure. FireTail101 (talk) 16:57, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the base coat a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:23, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Reups - Darkened the stripes and lightened the base. Firetail 22:53, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Also, in terms of image approval, when do I become an apprentice? FireTail101 (talk) 01:27, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

When a senior warrior thinks you're ready, they will promote you. For now, thin out and add more stripes to match his other images. 06:16, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are a bit slanted compared to his other images. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:05, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a bunch as its looking pretty neon. Try color picking from the starclanner. Also define the pale chest as its barely noticeable on this compared to his other images. You're doing a great job! 20:04, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

So fix the stripes, add more stripes, dim the earpink, and define the pale color. Ok, sure. Thanks for all the comments! FireTail101 (talk) 01:19, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? The image looks the same as before. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 12:04, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think Firetail re-uploaded yet, I think he/she was just confirming out loud what we all just commented. I'm on mobile though so I can't see recent changes at the moment. 21:46, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Ya I didn't reup yet, though I'm going on vacation tomorrow and I'll try to reup tonight. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:51, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

BTW changed my signature from old boring default, its different. I'm a he  Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:54, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups IN A RUSH Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 02:14, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you curve the tabby stripes so that they flow with the curve of the body? 1:24 Sat Dec 27

Could you thin out the stripes they seem thinner on the other images. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   14:10, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

I'm back now, so I'll be able to reup today or tomorrow. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 14:49, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Reups - Happy New Year! Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 22:06, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you give the stripes a bit more curviness? Lol that's not a word  04:09, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ya I though the same too, all I did was motion blur last time. I'll do that. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 16:13, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

I suggest you to not use motion blur, as it will most likely wreck the stripes. Maybe redraw them? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:43, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Make the stripes a tad bit darker to match his other images, while your at it. 08:02, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

I'll just redraw the stripes and make them darker. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 17:07, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Also, when I draw the stripes, do I gaussian blur them? (I use paint.net) Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 17:10, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Eh, yolo. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 17:30, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want me to draw you up a redline for the stripes? I could make one whenever i can get to my computer; but you could either trace over them or reference it. Because right now, they still look too thick to match his other images. 21:48, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Sure! That would be great. Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 22:00, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
The kits taking over the world so here's a StarClanner :3 20:33, December 19, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:20, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

On the tail too. This is pretty! :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:24, December 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups  Thanks:) 12:24, December 21, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the shading so it transitions more smoothly and blends better with the base. 20:00, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Rubblepaw 21:16, December 23, 2014 (UTC)

Can I take over? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 01:59, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

You don't need to ask- you may take over if you don't have another project.

Re-uploaded I'll take over ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:56, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and lighten the shading on the tail. 10:10 Wed Dec 24

Re-ups There we go :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 10:23, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Define your lightsource. The tail and back say > while the head and chest and legs say < 17:01, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

This image is cursed Could you lighten the shading a tad? It appears dark in some areas. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:09, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Shading on plain cats requires all your focus ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:38, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

The shading around the face/paws/shoulder looks a little funny. Could you reposition it so that it looks a little less...out of place? (I have no idea what I'm trying to say tbh) 16:43, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I understand so I'll try to clarify for ya^^ your shading needs to curve more with the body. It looks just kind of..put on there for lack of better wording. You need to place the shading where the light isn't touching, and have it curve to the body parts so it's not flat and not looking like it was just placed there for no reason. You can look at some of my images and you can see how the shading curves with the body. I'm horrid at explaining though so if I don't make sense im sorry. 21:34, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Used Burnt's account to re-up ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:30, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

There's a small streak of shading beside the shoulder that looks a little too hard-edged in comparison to the rest of the shading, so could you blur it? 06:14, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

There we go ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 06:18, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

Could you darken the grey to match the other images? Colour pick the dark grey from the other images to get the ideal colour. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   14:11, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

re-up ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:33, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receeding on the stomach and left foreleg. -- 20:56, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:24, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of receding shading on (our left) shoulder, and the tiniest bit on the flank, where the tail tip overlaps it. 21:52, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:00, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading a bit? 04:07, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

May I get a second opinion on this? Because if I smoothed it out more, someone would tell me to define it again. I think it's smooth enough as well. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 06:01, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Nah, I thought it could be smoothed out a bit. ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 06:01, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is receeding a tad bit on the stomach above the tail tip. Perhaps try making another shading layer and outlining around the edges, then blurring/smudging it to blend in with your other shading layer. This should give it depth, too. You dont have to, though :). 12:47, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

I watched my sister do it, Breeze. She already added about 3 layers to stop the shading from leaking. Anymore and it'll be too dark and somebody would tell her to blur it more again. I think it's fine, I don't see it leaking, really, not that I don't trust your opinion ^^. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:18, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I think it was leaking a bit actually. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:33, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Jackdaw's Cry (Ki) ~ For Approval
Yeah... I don't know.

Could you define the ear pink on this ==> ear? Nice job :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 14:17, December 22, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is fine, it's the shading over it which is making it darker than <-- ear. 10:08 Wed Dec 24

I have to agree with my sis, I can barely see it. Maybe lighten the shading up over there or add some light? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:29, December 24, 2014 (UTC)

Eh I can't see it too well, so just lighten the shading on that ear a shade or two. 21:42, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Lightened the shading on the --> ear.

Would you mind defining the shading a bit? It may just be my screen, so if that's the case, feel free to leave it. He's adorable <3 21:54, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think the shading is fine, but I'm not sure because it's hard to see on a black cat.

Black cat as he may be, I really can't see the shading at all unless I squint. Perhaps shift some highlights and shading around?

Wind (Ki) - CBA
Idk.-- 06:47, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too hard-edged. Perhaps smudge them? There's also a texture on the stripes for her other images- idk if you can tell or not.

Define the shading everywhere. damnit, I wanted this. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:07, December 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 06:16, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Are changes showing? It still looks hard edged. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:29, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I've smudged them as much as i can. If i smudge them some more, they'll start to look too soft/blurred. I can smudge them a little bit more if its needed, but i'd prefer not to. If you don't mind, i'd like to get a second opinion first. 08:44, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

They don't look smudged at all, though, when they need to be. I made the rogue image, I would know. They're much too hard-edged when you compare them to the other images. I don't think it's a matter of opinion on this one when they don't even look smudged to begin with.

Re-uploaded. Well, I can assure you they are smudged. I've smudged them a bit more and blurred it some. Hopefully, that helps. These images are so damn tiny >.>. 09:03, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Would you mind if you toned down the ear pink? It is very bright. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:46, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' 10:57, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I still can't tell the stripes are smudged. If you have to thicken the stripes a bit, and then smudge them, so be it. But as they are now, they look much too sharp for it to match the others.

Raise the opacity and rate. Currently they do look pixely. Now I'm not sure if the smudging on the stripes has to match, but you could blur the edges and only the edges of the stripes. It would make them look less pixelated, but it'd have to be on a low opacity. But I'm on mobile so I cant tell if they were done a certain way. And if I don't make sense, ignore me. I'm very short on sleep @.@ 13:30, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Eh. 20:54, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading a little, I'm having trouble seeing it. 01:34, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:55, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, meant to CBA this the other day and dozed off before I could.

Benny (Ki) - CBA
Um I tried to match but I guess it didn't work very well... oops. Not so proud of this one tbh. 23:59 Thu Dec 25

Them eyebrows make him look mad. Define his earpink a tad. This is really cute, Hawk ^^'.-- 05:58, December 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. :) 17:23 Fri Dec 26

I'm not sure if it's just my screen, but I still can't see the ear pink :/ feel free to ignore me if it looks fine. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:42, December 27, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is rather dull on his kittypet, so I'd rather not lighten it up anymore. If someone else agrees with you, however, I'll lighten it up some more. <span style="">17:17 Sat Dec 27

Maybe make it a tiny bit more pink? I think you did well to match it! --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:22, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine color-wise but if you can make it more visible on the black..I dunno I need to go back to bed lol 13:21, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. <span style="">20:26 Wed Dec 31

CBA?

Heathertail (Ki) - CBA
This took aaaaaaaaagggggeeeesssssss. And it's so tiny >< Main pelt colour and tabby colour from warrior but everything else is from apprentice. --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:51, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading overall haha I wanted this. But you had done a better job with her than I would ever have had ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:43, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 05:49, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Wow those stripes are fantastic. Could you darken the shading because I can barely see it. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   14:13, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload thanyou! --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:07, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading. I still can't see it. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:10, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I left the head alone cause I think that's dark enough. --Stealthfire star (talk) 10:49, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Define shading on the tail. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:03, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Define the (our right) earpink - I can't see it at all, under that shading. 21:55, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:47, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but could you lighten up the shading/smooth it out? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 13:01, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think just lightening the shading a tick or two might do the trick, honestly. It's smooth enough, I believe.

Reupload I just lightened the overall shading a couple of ticks. --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:57, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add a bit more light to the tiny tail and define the neck shading a bit? 04:04, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I've also lightened the head shading a tad. --Stealthfire star (talk) 04:15, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldnt she have some light hitting her back hind paw with this source? 07:59, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think so but if other people agree I'll change it. --Stealthfire star (talk) 08:08, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Breeze here. There should be some light. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 10:58, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Tallpoppy (Star) - For Approval
Dun, dun. What a beauty! (I can't do stripes). — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:31, December 28, 2014 (UTC)

How did you do that O.O anyways, as for this beautiful image, could you define the light on ==> that leg? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:29, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a tad. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:31, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded — Darken stripes and added some light to her right foreleg. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   19:35, December 29, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten your shading a bit, it's kind of clashing with the colors. 15:11, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, but the stripes are sharper on the other images so if I blur them like that they look even less like her other chararts. Thanks for the suggestion though. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   23:47, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'd rather just lighten up the face shading - because I fear that it will become too bright if I lighten up the body shading. I may tint the shading if that stops the colours clashing. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   15:14, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded — Lightened shading. Decide not to tint it. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   15:23, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Add more stripes and define them. <span style="">20:29 Wed Dec 31

Smooth out the shading on her face and (our left) shoulder. 21:56, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Can someone help me with smoothing out the lines? I cannot do it on GIMP. The stripe layer is here: http://oi58.tinypic.com/eq48t3.jpg. Thank you very much. I shall work on the shading now. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   01:52, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Won't blurring it at a rate of 2 help? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 13:00, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Blurring would probably just make it worse if she's trying to smooth it out... I think she should probably unblur the stripes since they look like that on her other images. Jayie made the queen, so why not ask her how she stylized her stripes?

Okay thanks for that! I'll ask Jayie now. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   15:34, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest, I've been meaning to redo my Tallpoppy queen, because I made my stripes way more blurred and not swirly enough compared to her other images. And I think these stripes here could do with more sharpening, not blurring. But that's just my two cents. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:41, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Not if this will help at all, but this is the stripe layer I had when I tried the image: http://tinypic.com/r/ei9w6b/8 --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 16:52, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the paw shading a teeny tiny bit? 17:14, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is throwing off her color a bit in places... perhaps either lighten it or tint it? (Tinting isnt mandatory; so by no means do you have to do this) but it may help if you tinted it a dark red or brown; but black is fine if done right. Shes very pretty. :) 21:56, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Snowbird (Ki) ~ For Approval
i dont know what i did with the shading but OK 16:38, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ahh here we go 16:43, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

Could you tone down the ear pink? It's very bright and neon looking. Looking great thou :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:02, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Are the changes showing? 16:19, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on ==> this leg? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:01, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Also define your light source, the tail shading and the body shading look like they're contradicting each other. 06:21, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, the ear pink still looks neon. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:30, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. does that work? 16:06, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:14, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Hi Giaria. Could you change the colour of the Ear Pink? It looks hot pinkish purply like. Thanks!

I suggest going to the apprentice tutorials, there's a thing to color pick from... ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:56, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Oops, I was meant to say color pick from her other images ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:28, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten up the darkness of the shading because it seems to be clashing with the white. 03:57, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

I'm trying to fix the earpink >-< it just won't cooperate. I'll be uploading later today. 17:29, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. That should appease the earpink gods. I went ahead and redid the shading because I hated how it was before and it should look better now okay. 17:38, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. lightening the shading EVEN MORE 17:40, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Im sorry, but the earpink still looks very bright. Try using more of a grayish-pink? Theres also some waste beneath the left forepaw. 07:57, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. "Better?" "Better." 19:14, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. There. Colorpicked from her warrior image and made it lighter. 19:20, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Moss (KP) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Aaargh I accidently called it Misty_(KP).kit.png! Someone help! EosOfTheDawn (talk) 19:48, December 30, 2014 (UTC)

She needs a collar. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:19, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

No, she doesn't because she was a loner first, but became a kittypet later. That's all. --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:26, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading, please. 03:47, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Renamed. Shoot me a talk page message next time if you ever need something renamed.

Could you define the ear pink? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 12:01, December 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up thanks for renaming! I had to brighten the earpink a bit to make it show this much... EosOfTheDawn (talk) 12:21, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Could you put in some ear pink? I dont really see any.

There is earpink, just that it's not really visible because it's a black cat. 16:27, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up Earpink is hell --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 18:28, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit, please.

Darkstripe (Alt Ro) - For Approval
silver and black tabby aka I stole Dreamcatcher's coloring.

Define the shading a little bit? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:10, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps make the pupil bigger? It kind of gives off the appearance of being just horizontal. <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  09:11, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

This is what I usually do with my eyes, and the style is my choice, so I'd rather not change that. The white itself is one pixel, and then I use different colors for anywhere from three to six pixels, depending on what I feel like at the time. I defined the shading, though.

Smoothen out the stripes maybe? kind look rugged and shaky. (Or is it supposed to be like that?)

Can you define the leg shading a bit? I love the stripes. How did you make them? 04:01, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the shading because it bothered me. The rugged and shaky look for the stripes is supposed to be like two of my other silver tabbies, so I don't really want to smooth them out. I smudged them a bit more, but I'm not going to blur them or anything.

Eh, not to sound rude, but it looks like there's a square on his front because of the shading. He also looks a tad flat. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 05:01, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

I don't get what you mean???? Explain please?

Eh ignore the square thingy. I still think he looks a little flat. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:10, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Did you add any facial shading? If you did, could you define it just a bit? If not though, ignore this :) 07:55, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I defined the facial shading (or the head w/e), but I fail to see where he looks flat. Mind pointing it out, since I can't see it?

I'm going to take a guess and say that this is the square he is talking about. I outlined it. I don't know- that's the only square that I noticed. EDIT: I just use "he" to be used in general to someone whose gender I don't know. <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  16:27, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Please please respect the fact that I'm a girl -_- Also, it's mainly flat on the body, yes, the square was what Pinely is talking about, but I think it's fine now. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:47, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not gonna define the shading much more- overly defined shading on these looks disgusting. Or at least my shading looks disgusting.

Moon Shadow (Ki) ~ For Approval
I hope I didn't do too bad on my first Charart, haha. <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  08:43, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the texture. None of his other images have it. Lovely for your first charart thou :) ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:09, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That makes sense. And thank you! ^^ <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  09:16, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Also, heading should be "for evaluation" since you're a kit. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 13:02, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Not anymore- Pinely clearly knows what they're doing so I'm going to make them an apprentice.

Oh, my bad. Thank you for the rank up, though! Anything else that I should change? <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  01:18, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry if I sound like I'm nagging your image, but could you add some light to his back paw? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:31, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Nah, I don't think that at all. Any help is appreciated. <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  02:45, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the right ear pink? Looks really dark..

Reups. Anything else? ^^ <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  03:08, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe define the light in the paws? Very nice for your first! 03:56, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thank you. :D <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  04:07, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on his <--- foreleg. 07:52, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups. I hope I blurred the shading alright. My tablet was being a butt. <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  07:59, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Tornear (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Happy New Years! I'm starting out the new year with this charart. ^-^ 19:19, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hmmm, think you could remove some of the shading/define the light on the top of the paws and on the far ear? 19:38, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Why not? 19:53, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add/define the earpink? I can't see it at all. Also, the highlight on the nearest forepaw could be dulled, and the shading on the forelegs blurred. Last thing, I see some waste below the forepaw. Overall, nice job! 22:59, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Holy crap I totally forgot the earpink. 23:11, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Darn I so wanted this Smooth out the shading on the tail and add more light? He looks purrty ^^ ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 02:08, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks~ 02:27, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading everywhere, it looks a bit hard edged. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 03:26, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blurred shading some 03:44, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and expand the light on the head. I'd think with the source, there would be a bit more shading on the head itself.

Does the facial shading look hard edged? 16:25, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, very hard edged. Blur everywhere to smooth it out some EosOfTheDawn (talk) 16:54, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

I blurred it to the max. 17:09, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Can you try lightening the face shading and blurring some more? It's still too sharp. EosOfTheDawn (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Boom shakalaka 20:15, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Could you defeintly the light source? The head tells me it's coming from above, while the haunch and the chest shading tells me it's coming from the bottom. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:44, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the face a bit more, please. 07:51, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Redid the shading and changed the color a bit. 17:30, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out a bit more; it still looks a bit too hardedged(?) as it is now. This is really great, Tiger. ^^'

Thanks ^^ 18:01, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur it more? I suggest you to blur it with Guassian blur at a rate of fifteen and repeat until it looks nice with ctrl + F, then fix the light on the legs afterwards. ^^ Hope that helped. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 03:50, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Gaussian Blur has a really bad habit of making the shading recede. The blur took works just as well, if not better, honestly.

Think you could add some shading to the upper part of the tail, to make it look less flat? Shorthair tails suck so much 18:53, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Newtspeck (Ki) ~ For Approval
Here's Newtkit:) 21:20, January 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 06:31, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups 12:24, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Shes beautiful, Sziri. 'v'

Re-ups Thanks Breezy ^_^ 16:08, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Fleck (Ki) ~ For Approval
chillest cat in the series tbh 09:02, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Make the chest and stripes less smudged looking to match his other images? Maybe blur them more? OMG my sister is fuming now she wanted this haha ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:09, January 2, 2015 (UTC)

Is there neck shading? If so can you define it? 03:59, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. no there isnt any neck shading, only muzzle and head shading. I think the chest is fine but I blurred the stripes a little bit. 04:10, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading? I can hardly see it. He looks so adorable 'v' 07:48, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded 13:48, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

define the earpink? can barely see it 19:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

its the same colour as the loner, i dont really want to change it because itll probably lead to soe uncessary tweaks. but w/e ill change it if everyone else agrees 01:18, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine, tbh. It doesnt always have to be very brightly visible; which in this case, i can still see it just fine. Define the shading on his <--- foreleg, please.

Jake (Lo) ~ For Approval
I like how this turned out ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 05:51, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes at the ends a little more; they look kinda cut off. This is nice! EosOfTheDawn (talk) 16:55, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Also I'm not sure but are you supposed to match the collar with the kittypet image's? 17:11, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Changed the shading to smudged shading. Collars don't need to match by the way. Also, if possible, may I keep his rouge image? If Skye would like it (since they are the OA of the Kittypet) they may have it ^^ <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 04:00, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Shading's been bothering me, so I changed it back to blurred. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:00, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Theres waste by the tail. 07:46, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Why is the shading such a pain in the butt <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 07:57, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the head shading a little. I hate doing shading too :)--EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:46, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 10:58, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is throwing off the color a bit... perhaps try lightening it just a tad?

Re-ups I thought it was a bit dark there XD <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 12:05, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Birdpaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
a little sweetie 15:29, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Does she need a scar? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 06:42, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Didnt that happen when she was an apprentice? If it did, then i dont think she does. Mind defining the tail shading just a tad? If you think it looks fine, then feel free to disregard me. 07:37, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

No, she doesn't need a scar. It happened when she was an apprentice, not a kit. I'll do the tail shading later. 11:52, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 12:33, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the rear paw, if there is any because with this light source I think there is supposed to be light there. 17:32, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (Ki) - For Approval
Not sure if I'm allowed to put this here since I'm not a member yet but here is my first charart. My sister Tigerbird showed me how to make chararts. 20:27, January 3, 2015 (UTC)

Lower the shading on the chin, and define the shading on the tail, and maybe erase a bit of the shading on that back foot. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped How do you get promoted to an apprentice rank? 02:33, January 4, 2015 (UTC)  02:34, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

A senior warrior will promote you when they think you are ready. Blur the shading more? <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 04:22, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

This is very good for your first! Could you add some shading to his legs? I see his paw shading; but if you did add leg shading, could you possibly define it? (As in, unblur/unsmudge it?) It may just be my screen; so if you think its fine, dont worry about it. 07:45, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and I'll go make you an apprentice now.

Re-uploaded Thank you everyone! Also, I smudge my shading. 16:27, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

You can still smooth it out even though it's smudged. Although that's nice to know for future references so we don't get into another screaming match over ways to shade. x.x Smooth it out a bit more?

Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) - For Approval
it feels like it's been forever since i've made a charart Brick   The Bite of '87  13:09, January 4, 2015 (UTC) Define the shading a bit more, please.

Yes; it's hard to see where the lighting is coming from. Also, try to define the earpink on <== that ear. ^^ <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  16:23, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lower the shading on the left side of the head? Nice job! Lucky I wanted this so bad Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 01:12, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading.

Fallowtail (Ki) ~ For Approval
eh i tried to match the style?? 16:30, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Very nice! ^^ Though, could you fix the lighting on the tail? The shading doesn't match up. The light source should be on the underside of the tail. <font color="#6666FF" face="segoe print">♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible  17:37, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink on <== ear. <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size:12px; color:Red; text-shadow:Orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">~ Burntclaw <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Yolo <span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting; font-size:11px;color:Red; text-shadow:orange 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;">♫ ♪ 00:24, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink's colorpicked from the elder, so can't do much to the earpink, and I've always used this lightsource before, so I think this is fine. 00:33, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, it kinda looks a bit rough on the body and the tail. Also the source is fine and used on like dozens of kits.

Jake (Ro) ~ For Approval
not sure why he's getting both a loner and a rogue cite, but I guess it must've been in the PC discussion. rainbow collar should totally be canon. 16:09, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! The pelt color is fine, but where did you get the rainbow collar cite? I thought it was purple. Also, maybe fix the pupil shading? Firetail :D Sharks are OSM 16:59, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Nope to both. The collar color is artist's choice as we don't have any cite for it, so I'm making it rainbow. Jayce made it purple on the kittypet, and it's pink on the kit, and blue on the loner above. Eye style is also artist's choice. And even if it wasn't, 'fix' isn't specific enough for me to know what you want me to do. However, reup forgot the nick in his ear. 17:50, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah his twolegs could've gotten new collars for him over time too^^ you can match if you want, but it's not mandatory. Could you define the earpink just a bit? This is lovely Shinx^^ 17:56, January 5, 2015 (UTC)

reups 18:47, January 5, 2015 (UTC)