Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Jumper (ro) ~ Redone
shorthaired blanks suck 21:38, 8/23/2017

Add some shading on the collar teeth and smooth the ear pink

fixed. theres shading on the teeth already? 22:29, 8/23/2017

I mean the ones in the light, with, you know, no shading. They look flat and I think some shading could be added to make them look more 3d but *shrug*

i didnt add shading there because it would contradict my source. its fine as is, but if more people agree, ill add them 22:35, 8/23/2017

I know this is from a different side, but since this was nominated to match Barley exactly, I think that the tail black placement needs to match the loner above this and just be the tip instead of all the way across. And perhaps a splotch of black on the very > side of the belly too.

fixed. 23:34, 8/23/2017

Jumper and Hoot look exactly the same as Barley. The Heart of a Warrior shows just as much on multiple panels. You need to match the pattern that David has set a lot better, different side or not. Which actually means you need to match this, as the warrior blank shows this side of the image.

fixed. think i got it? 03:13, 8/24/2017

Remove the underbite. For one, there's no proof that's Jumper. For two, they are identical cats. For three, he's not always shown with the teeth like that. There are some pictures that actually show said cat's teeth on the upper part of his mouth as well, so while it might be an underbite, since there are alternating images, we can't add it w/out concrete proof.

fixed. 18:53, 8/24/2017

Could you maybe dull down the blue shading a bit? I feel like it's too saturated, but that's just my opinion.. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 05:04, August 25, 2017 (UTC)

fixed. is this better? 05:09, 8/25/2017

I feel like the < black patch on the tail should be smaller, receded on < side, because on barley's images it doesn't go the length of the tail like this

Jumper (ki) - Redone
I'm so sorry i completely ruined this image 3:

I know this is from a different side, but since this was nominated to match Barley exactly, I think that the tail black placement needs to match the loner above this and just be the tip instead of all the way across.

reups neato

reups fixed the face bc it bothered me

Jumper and Hoot look exactly the same as Barley. The Heart of a Warrior shows just as much on multiple panels. You need to match the pattern that David has set a lot better, different side or not. Which actually means you need to match this, as the warrior blank shows -> side of the kit blank. and actually this can match the kit that Branchwing posted.

reups tried

wait a sec, wheres his underbite? or does he not get one on this blank..? 07:52, 8/24/2017

I don't think that's an actual underbite that he's shown with. Regardless, there is no proof that the cat shown is Jumper anyways. They are literally identical cats.

I think the black on -> front leg should actually be on the other side of the leg. David commented about it being correct on Barley's kit image (even tho they crossed it out) but yeah I think it should be switched on this one and on Hoot's

But, counter argument, on the warrior its on the back of the leg. This blank may have weird anatomy and legs, but this is the best I can match the placement of the warrior.

Hmm I can see where you're coming from now, but on the warrior it's pretty much a straight line down to the leg, but the way you've done it here, it like curves around the front of the leg to get to the back and at first glance it looks like it doesn't match

same thing i said on hoots kit 20:35, August 25, 2017 (UTC)

Hoot (ki) - Redone
I like the way this turned out. I tried to match barley without hoot and jumper's images looking literally the exact same, hope it worked out.

I think there could be a little black on the haunch, like you have on jumper's kit. Looks really nice :)

smooth the shading a bit my dude 01:26, 8/24/2017

reups thanks ^^ and fun fact: all of my files have weird names that don't make sense but relate to the cat's name?? jumper's is jumping spider and this one is hoothoot. sandynose's was sandyboy and when i worked on deerdapple it was deerbo. idk why

Jumper and Hoot look exactly the same as Barley. The Heart of a Warrior shows just as much on multiple panels. You need to match the pattern that David has set a lot better, different side or not. Which actually means you need to match this, as the warrior blank shows -> side of the kit blank. and actually this can match Barley's kit that Branchwing has posted.

reups still don't agree with the leg thing, but i'm on my own here so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Smooth out the shading between the front legs nearing the chest. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 05:03, August 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think this needs that second black patch that shows on the tail of barley's loner, even from this angle, and perhaps make the black all the way across parts on the front paws even to each other, just to match the kits of jumper and barley :)

i also think you'd be able to see that patch around the chest/stomach area 20:33, August 25, 2017 (UTC)

Sandynose (KP) - Tweaked
Now really proud of this, but here's a Sandynose! OA I believe was Pikachushinx? Tweaked to remove darker face. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:08, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

wouldnt there be texture on the face? 02:15, 8/24/2017

Sorry to butt in, but there is. I can see it there. :D 02:55, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

The face still kinda looks like it has a faint ginger overlay.

I can't see the texture very well, compared to the rest of the body. Could you define it?

Re-uploaded. It feels kind of hard to do the texture on this guy, lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:46, August 26, 2017 (UTC)

Barley (Ki) ~ Redone
David if you want this I'll happy surrender it. wiki's being really weird for me right now so tell me if it didn't reupload correctly. 02:45, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. I also don't think David wants it; as far as I know, they just wanted the loner.

This is really minor but the black bit on the -> front leg would go along the other side of the leg like I have on hoot and jumper. (to match the warrior)

I think this is right. it goes along the back of the leg on the warrior, not the front. 06:27, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not going to touch the black, I'm pretty sure it matches the warrior. 14:43, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Expanded the black on the face and fixed up the earpink a little. 18:25, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

You have the leg back going on the front of the leg, while the warrior goes along the back.

I'm pretty the side I have the black on is the back side. Even if the blank is not very anatomically correct, where you consider the front of the leg to be, is the back of the leg on a real cat that is in basically the same pose. (David even said that it was correct before they crossed it out) 21:36, August 24, 2017 (UTC)

Barley (KP) ~ Redone
I was experimenting with the collar but I failed. ;-; thx for the file david

Smooth the earpink a little

re-up redid the collar and smoothed out the earpink, and I came back from a friday of classes. forgive me if this is crappy

Hoot (Lo) ~ Redone
hoot hoot. I hope no one cares that I kept the old collar because I was too lazy to make one

Hoot (Le) ~ Redone
Niño guapo

smooth the flank shading <span style="">04:14, 8/26/2017