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Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
"me? i loved him." r ♥  ' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through ' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <19:37, 6/01/2019> ​

Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

re-up  r ♥   ' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through ' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <23:12, 6/07/2019> ​

This might sound a bit weird, but can you lessen the shading a touch inside the ear? Cats' ears can be on the translucent side so I don't think the shadows would be quite that dark 04:54, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

re-up nah you're good  r ♥   ' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through ' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <15:58, 6/09/2019> ​

I think the haunch should show more of the stripes; the MC here does show some that aren't consistent with this placement of 'em. I know the queen came first, but there's also some parts that aren't visible on the queen that should be made to match the MC.

Still working? 17:40, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ CBA
i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out  Ellie  life is an illusion 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out? 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be smoothed out more. It's still very sharp, and the revision history shows only slight changes.

The design was supposed to be sharp, so I'm tryng to smoothbit as much as I can while kesping the shading design. But yeah, ill fix that  Ellie  life is an illusion 21:45, June 4, 2019 (UTC)

I think if you lighten it just a little more, you can remove some of the sharpness - but Spooky's comment still stands, its still sharp.

Re-Ups  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:41, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's shading leaking away from the lineart on the belly, underneath the tail, and on the > back leg. If could nab away waste floating about and add some light to the tail tip as well, that'd be great.

re-ups  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:30, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the back of the head/neck area? It looks rather blocky in comparison to the rest of the image.

Will re-up all my images soon <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:37, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:28, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 00:20, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (W) ~ For Approval
Eh it's okay -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:42, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad and lessen the shading on the tail-tip? There wouldn't be that much with your source. 00:45, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

Her colors were also updated recently to match her kits, so make sure you color pick from one of the other images. 15:46, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''I changed the shading to match the kit too -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:40, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail-tip- there wouldn't be that much there with your source. 01:31, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:34, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth? Especially on the legs and tail? 15:53, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, it looks a bit over-blurred so it's losing it's definition 04:57, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  20:43, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more depth to the shading? It still seems kinda flat - and I also think the shading on the < side of the face could be lessened with this source

I don't think the left side (our left) of the face would be in shadow, per the rest of your source. did not read all of spooky's comment, disregard.

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   hOnK :o)  17:19, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, I think some more depth on the < front leg and haunch wouldn't be remiss. I also believe the source would allow for more light on the top of the < front leg

as a head's up, go ahead and start matching the pale blue-gray shade you see in the old one's prior revisions, we're swapping her and Mistystar to be pale due to a LS cite, per PC

'''Reuploaded! ''' Is this the right one? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  23:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add just a little more light to the muzzle, specifically on << side of the face, as its in more light?

With your source, I think the top part of your >tail wohld be in light as it has shading on too to bottom and that doesn't make since with the source so if you could fix that <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:45, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little light to the top of the paws 04:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Dewnose (W) - CBA
My first charart ever lol. (Hand drawn shading, not texture) <span style="">15:29 Wed Jun 5

Could you add some shading to the hind paw? 15:37, June 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think there'd be a touch less white on the tail, basing off the apprentice

Could you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:27, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this tomorrow. I'm exhausted from work the past few days oof <span style="">22:25 Sat Jun 8

Reuploaded <span style="">14:19 Sun Jun 9

Could you perhaps even out the transition between the draw-on styled shading vs. to where it kinda becomes the typical blurred style? It's just right there where it switches over that looks a little off to me

Reuploaded <span style="">12:02 Wed Jun 12

CBA? 17:41, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Ambermoon (Alt K) - For Approval
love the new blanks. Very cute 01:03, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:17, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:48, June 6, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading leaking on the tail from the haunch shading. 01:09, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  02:02, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading. 16:13, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Define it some when you do expand it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:11, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's always shading... you'd think I'd know how to do it by now 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source- where is the light coming from? 19:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It's coming from the left--where her face is. How would you emphasize that? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

With that, there shoud be no shading on the top of the tail. 22:52, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

To add to Potato's comment, to make it as coming to face, there wouldn't be any shading on the < side of the haunch either, the shading on the bottom of the tail would extend to the tailtip, there'd be more on the > side of the arm, and some extending to the chin.

Reuploaded Completely redid shading. With my luck, probably made it worse, but, whatever 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Switch your haunch shading to the other side. 20:14, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needn’t go so high up the backbone. Also - the haunch is unshaded. Should be some to form the shape of the bum; kinda how it is on some of the other images around.

The shading needs expanded quite a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:28, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded --mutters something incoherent about shading-- 02:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

the tail shading could be expanded a bit more. 03:08, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

The shading still goes too far up the back

Reuploaded Fixing the back was harder than I anticipated... 03:22, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Appledawn (W) ~ For Approval
It's the only one of the set, so there's nothing I have to be matching, right? I also don't know if I'm happy with the eyes or texture... 00:19, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

We recently agreed to match the old images, so this would have to match the old warrior. But I think the colors match close enough with the exception of the eye color and ear pink...the stripes should be curlier. 01:04, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading and shading depth?

Define the light and the pupil in the eye 02:22, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes need to be a bit thicker. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:39, June 7, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, that was painful. Am I allowed to keep the texture? I don't think the old one had any... 16:47, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It did not have texture, as far as I'm aware.

Do I have to remove it, then? 22:34, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

It does have to match the old image, so yeah

Reuploaded Well, that's annoying that I wasted so much time w/ the texture, but at least it's easy to undo 04:09, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, and expand it on the back?

Reuploaded One of these days I'll know how to do shading... 02:39, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Practice makes perfect! With this source, there would not be shading on  >> that side of the haunch. There would also be shading on the top of the most visible hind leg, and the bottom tail shading where the tail touches the ground would be on the top part, not the bottom. 04:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

There's some shading from the flank leaking onto the top of the haunch. Could you add depth to the hind leg and foot, along with the front legs? Perhaps expand the shading on the front leg and connect it to the shoulder too? If you're trying to match the original image, I think the stripes could stand to be a bit more... wavy? I'm not sure what word to use to describe it. The earpink in <- ear looks a little duller than what you have in the other, it looks a little off. This image is turning out great! 18:25, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded And the autopsy reveals: Death by shading! As for the other comments: 1. Could I please have a second opinion before I redo the stripes again? 2. The earpink in both ears is the same, but the shading tint is throwing off the left ear, and I'm open to suggestions on how to fix that. 02:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

the earpink is leaking 03:08, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

The stripe pattern doesn't match the prior image, so that does need to be fixed. Whether you tweak what you have or redo them is up to you - whatever gets it there

Reuploaded Third times's a charm! Now I know why I've never done tabbies that already had some done... I'm honestly not sure this came out any better 03:22, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Rainflower (W) ~ For Approval
like this one so much more than the old one :p

00:41, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more shading lines to smooth out the transition on the shoulder shading? The very top. And some more on the haunch and tail shading, too, while you're at it. 03:20, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:28, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading.

00:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading just at where the tail bends in the middle, and define it on the < ear?

Reuploaded Tried my best with smoothing it

17:53, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

I think this could be smoothed a lot more, its still super rough. You could try transitioning it so it fades into the fur as the way it is now makes it look very abrupt. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:26, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Solid colored cats with no texture = war on textured shading. i tried to smooth it out lmao

15:42, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading looks really good! could you smooth the transition slightly on the bend of the tail? other than that spot I think it's good to go <span style="">17:14 Thu Jun 13

Cherrytail (W) ~ For Approval
wad made to match the old warrior since that is first in the set, also match to the apprentice. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:30, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading depth on the back paw closest to us; the shading looks darker than the rest of the image. Also, define tail shading near the base of it.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:31, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white paws, some

Leaking shading on the white paw closest to us, and could you smudge out the ginger patch right underneath her ---> eye? 20:13, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

I don’t think changes are showing, Mink. I can’t see a difference between the uploads, can reupload again or show the changes elsewhere?

Comparing to the other images, the ginger needs to be a tad more orangish. This looks yellow. 17:46, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked from the file I had as well as the warrior and since the warrior came first that's the one I need to match as well as the apprentice. Especially considering most of images don't matches colorwise or patternwise I think I'll leave it to match the warrior and apprentice. Also, I'll upload on the changes soon <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:23, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking at the > paw 03:07, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, I can't lighten the paws very much as that affects the whole shading but I did erase some you could tell it was white <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:34, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

The paws still look distinctly gray, imo. You could always put the lighter shading for white on a separate layer so it doesn't affect the rest, that's what I did in one of the earlier versions of the loner.

I can only do that with the front paws as the back would be completely covered in shading with my source. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:10, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Just because something’s completely in shading doesn’t mean we shouldn’t be able to tell it’s cooor underneath. All of the paws have a hard time looking white, which, creatively, is a completely rectifiable issue.

Dawnbright (K) ~ For Approval
she 13:14, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Same as warrior <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:33, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

what i said on the warrior.

14:06, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

Same as warrior; brighten up the white.

Re-Uploaded! Is this better? I kinda overworked it.. 19:45, June 8, 2019 (UTC)

could u define the shading a bit? i know this might mess the white but i can barely see it.

02:32, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 19:56, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail tip <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:21, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 22:12, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, especially the cheek a touch more 03:42, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 17:40, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Rushtooth (W) - For Approval
Everything from the DF, including shading layers/opacity. <span style="">14:24 Sun Jun 9

the stripes look thing on the others, could you possibly thin them out some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is over the page limit of 60 images. 15:01, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Never mind, some images were archived. 15:29, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest shading a bit. 20:10, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste trapped between the < front paw and the back paw

Can you smooth the leg shading for the front legs? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:39, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Those areas of shading are affected by the pattern, there wasn't much I could do about them /: <span style="">12:03 Wed Jun 12

Super minor, but you've got waste in these areas 00:23, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt W 3) - CBA
It is the only one for this description, so I can change the pattern, since it was also my original image. I prefer this one lol <span style="">14:24 Sun Jun 9

Same as Rushtooth, this is over the page limit. 15:02, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Read above ^^  15:30, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on the face just a smidge?

Reuploaded <span style="">12:04 Wed Jun 12

CBA?

Fernsong (Ki) ~ For Approval
oa claim that spooky gave to me. this was a hard pattern though :(

23:24, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading just a tiny bit on the top of the haunch? He is babey... 23:27, June 9, 2019 (UTC)

There should be paler streaks right above the eyes, paler parts sweeping up along the haunch lineart, and paler front paws. And the stripes appear more...scratchy? Not at smooth and uniform. I'm sorry that I'm bad with words. >.< 01:32, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

This looks a bit darker than his other images? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:43, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I colorpicked directly from his apprentice image. 11:31, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think the shading needs to go so far up the back

Reuploaded 15:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Cora (W) - For Approval
Same source as Cloversplash. Comments? 01:05, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Oops! I forgot her bitten ear, I'll add that in a moment. 01:06, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:20, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

I know you're using clover's source but the shading could be smoothed a bit more.

12:47, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

honestly, it could be smoothed a lot. its too hard edged <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:27, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  17:51, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded again tweaked things about the ears. 17:59, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the pupils look more like pupils and not a black line that goes through her eyes <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:42, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pupil change. 22:29, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could stand to be smoothed some more on the shoulder and haunch. 00:24, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (W) - For Approval
17:41, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

This is the old one, are the changes showing? 17:41, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

The changes are showing now. Good work on one of the trickiest patterns! There needs to be a lot more flecks and the brown is lighter. 17:45, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:55, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Would you like one of the files? I think I still have Jayce's old warrior and I have the hunter if you want them. They might help technicality wise. 18:09, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the brown, all im seeing is gray <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:48, June 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i think i'm alright vec but thank you ^^ and i've tried brightening the brown, there's not much i can do without making it look way off color 23:05, June 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The brown looks good now, I just couldn't really see it before. This is great btw <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:44, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Brighten the white a little bit^^ To my knowledge, the other ones used pure white

The base is actually a pale gray with patches of white for context. 20:24, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded fixed to more closely match the base in vec's pics 00:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I can confirm that I did in fact use pure white when I made this. If you're still stuck on the colors, I know Vec's offered the files. When I made this, I didn't expect it to get more than maybe one or two images in the set, max. Everything's basically using a flecked brush, kind of like how I designed File:Patch Pelt.kit.png and File:Night (HJ).kit.png. The only thing here that I'm seeing is it seems a bit too dark overall, is there any way you could add some brighter areas, perhaps to mainly the tail or legs?

so wait...should i follow vec's base or just do the pure white? because the pure white is what i had originally. 15:17, June 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Follow my images, but the kit I showed is Jayce's. Jayce is just saying that the white used is needed, pure white. 16:41, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tried brightening the white as much as possible 18:46, June 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Dawnflower (K) - For Approval
We're back, baby. I changed a few things, including the shading and adding the small gap in the haunch that I forgot before. I'll upload her warrior tommorow. Comments? 02:04, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face, especially around the cheek bone and smudge/blur the earpink into a pelt some so it's not such a perfect straight line 02:21, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

expand and smooth the haunch, please.

05:38, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth all the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded this is as far I'm willing to go with the face shading, as my source doesn't call for it to go all the way up the cheekbone. 22:37, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Where would the source be from, then? The seems very close to one of the two typical sources we see here - in all but the cheekbone. Unless other things give, what is here does call for it to connect, as Scarlet said.

The source is Baykit's. I'll reupload in a moment. 23:00, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Since your using Baykit's source, the facial shading corves all the way down so you would need to do as Scarlet said. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:13, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:00, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the earpink a little more into the pelt? It still looks like a straight line,

Also, as an addition, can you connect the jaw shading to the chest? With this source, that should all be shadow.

Reuploaded  23:55, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Considerong you haunch shading isn't expanded much can you either expamd that or recede the tail shadinf <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Bramblestar (W) - For Approval
Another broad-shouldered dark brown tabby tom in the books. But he's the nice one :) Hopefully I gave Icy's Bramblestar some justice. 02:05, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a touch more and define the light on the tail 03:43, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Dsfine the shading on the paler parts I cant see it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:47, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

is the pale area -> actually part of the chest? on other images it seems to be the leg.

I meant that to be a part of the chest, but I see what you're talking about now... should I change it? 15:34, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Personally I would, most images so far have been treating that as a front leg

Can you fill in the space between the legs?

Additionally, for reference, doing something similar to Apple Blossom, Star Flower, or Quick Water for the pale chest. 20:19, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

The hind paw furthest from us isn't filled in, and I'm having trouble seeing the shading in general. 23:07, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 14:03, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Echosong (W) ~ CBA
I tried. I decided to attempt matching the StarClan since that seemed to match her original warrior the closest. The loner and kittypet will probably need to be tweaked. 04:24, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Not positive, but if there's light on the top of the head and the tips of the ears, shouldn't there be some on the top of the tail as well? 21:21, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:33, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Cinderfur (K) - For Approval
04:30, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:48, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

meh i can see it? 13:18, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think it could definitely be defined, as the shading covers nearly the whole tail and you cant see it very well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the tail light.

Since it's shorthair, it does have a little bit of a chest - which I think should be in shading.

Reuploaded 02:19, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading to the base of the hind paw that shows under the tail, and the shading is leaking slightly at the base of the chin; just above the chest

Reuploaded 02:06, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Birchbark (K) - For Approval


05:23, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, also this really good omg <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:48, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Also thicken the shading behind and the elbow into the crease at the belly 21:22, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Same as above^^

Reuploaded i hate shading with a passion 02:48, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the belly shading just a bit to match the transition the other bits have. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:38, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded i tried 02:29, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth just a tad more <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:11, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Tbh it looks fine. 13:07, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

The shading to the stomach and arm are more rough than the other areas. I don't think it would hurt to smooth just so it would match? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:32, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

i think it could be smoothed out 15:14, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Violetshine (Ki) - CBA


my baby  Define the shading on the black a bit, especially on the face? 22:40, June 11, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so I've been trying to define the shading like you asked, but the placement of the white is making that extremely difficult. I honestly haven't been able to come up with anything remotely acceptable.

I can see the shading just fine. CBA? 00:26, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) - CBA
<span style="">22:01 Tue Jun 11

CBA? 00:27, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Birdwing (K) ~ CBA


reups didn't realise it was shorthaired

Maybe add a little bit of shading in the tiny flank/stomach area peeking between the shoulder and haunch? 00:27, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

reups

CBA? 17:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Appledusk (W) ~ For Approval
These new blanks are awesome!<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:02, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reupload Of course I only notice my shading issues the moment I upload.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:14, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

With your source, there should be less shading on the tail, could you lessen that some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:37, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

I had this issue with the other images... but I really think his base looks extremely greenish in tint. I think we should perhaps tweak his images to match the color of his official website icon.

Emberfoot (W) - For Approval
Will mess around with shading later, I wanted to get this up before I went to bed. On an unrelated note, if anyone has one of Dapplenose's files could you please send it to me (mello.roxas13@gmail.com)? 01:07, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shoulder shading a bit, and maybe expand it on both front legs? 16:47, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Eaglewing (Ki) ~ CBA
All colors from other images. Comments? 01:50, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you either define the shading or the shading depth some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:29, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Deadfoot (K) ~ CBA
01:55, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Muffin. CBA?

Dawnflower (W) - For Approval
Will smooth the shading more tomorrow. The source is from Strikestone's alt warrior. 02:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the transition between shading depth so its a little more like a nice gradient. Also, possibly add some more to around this area so it flows with the cat's shape a little more.

can you define the eye depth? <span style="">02:15 Wed Jun 12

Dsfine the light source in the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:36, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add the shading around the lower jaw, chin, around the muzzle, and crease at the top of <-- shoulder 18:51, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some and smooth it some more <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:13, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Eeltail (MV) (W) - CBA
matched to the old warrior as best as possible

Could you darken the shading a little bit?

reuploaded hows that?

CBA? 17:37, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Briarlight (W) - CBA
lineart was voted on, all changes to that can be discussed via the talk page and this section is for the art itself

reuploaded fixed some things that were bothering me

Such a pretty warrior!! Define the light on the toes of the hind paws 17:22, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

CBA? 17:38, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Littlecloud (Alt W) ~ CBA
definitely one of my favorite sets

CBA? 17:38, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Brackenwing (W) - CBA
Tried to match it as best I could. 15:46, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 17:39, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Storm Pelt (W) ~ For Approval
16:04, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the scar a tad <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Snaketooth (ShC) ~ For Approval
i never thought i would have to do this pattern again but here we go folks 16:44, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

She looks a tad cross-eyed. 17:21, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 17:42, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

White Tail (W) ~ For Approval
Last of my warriors! 16:44, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Might you darken the tint just a bit, it seems pretty neon right now. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:19, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reups I darkened it a little, but I'd rather not change the tint any more due to it matching the rest of the set. 17:36, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Russetfur (K) - For Approval
trying a different light source this time 18:05, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the facial/head/ear shading a bit? 00:30, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:33, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Doespring (K) - For Approval
21:16, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? 22:07, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

I can see the shading, its pretty dark as is. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:17, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Pink Eyes (W) ~ For approval
21:46, June 12, 2019 (UTC)

Applefrost (K) - For Approval
colour picked from her family tree icon

What's your light source? As the haunch shows it from above but the way the facial shading is suggests otherwise <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:14, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

It’s literally the same shading I’ve used for all my kits, dude.

It's not much different than any source I've used, or that I've seen used. Perhaps it's just more apparent due to this lacking texture or tabby markings. Regardless, the guideline for shading is that it needs to represent a 3D object, not that it needs to be 100% accurate- that's just the forced realism in the project that appears to have become standard.

Eagle Feather (W) ~ For Approval
kinda funny how the warrior blank looks like the early settler blank sitting down <span style="">22:51 Wed Jun 12

maybe define the shading on the tail and expand the haunch shading a little bit 07:41, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Ebonyclaw (W) ~ For Approval
fixing eyes later. 03:42, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Should she have the moss around her collar? 03:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I just followed the old warrior so i dunno 03:50, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think we suggested that there would be moss on the warrior instead of the kittypet?

Also thin the collar a bit, it looks a bit big for a cat's collar 05:16, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think we are doing those not in A-D unless you're the OA of the image, which you don't appear to be unless I'm missing something?

-Es are listed. 09:06, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reups yeehaw 13:18, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be shorthaired, to match her kittypet? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Warrior came first so no Malina457 (talk) 19:28, June 13, 2019 (UTC)malina

Redone kittypet was posted before the redone warrior, meaning this needs to be short-furred to match it.

Frecklewish (TC) (Alt. W2) - For Approval
03:47, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Stone (HJ) (Ki) ~ For Approval
OA claim given to me by Spooky. 03:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Lightning Stripe (Ki) - For Approval
you aren't going to see her white part on her with the blanks at this view.

Violetshine (W) - For Approval


Can you smoothe the belly shading just a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:15, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Applefur (TNP) (W)- For Approval
05:53, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the mottles a little bit 07:40, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

reup upped the saturation and decreased the light 09:25, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the leg shading some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:38, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

REUP fixed other things that were bothering me 15:28, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Blue Whisker (W) ~ For Approval


she looks a wee bit crosseyed. 19:35, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 17:20, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Comments? 17:20, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Beechfur (TC) (W) ~ For Approval


18:43, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think he'd get this, as he doesn't have a description. 20:10, June 13, 2019 (UTC)

Daisytail (W) ~ For Approval
matched her starclan and queen image more than her warrior one 18:51, June 13, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel