Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Whitewing (Q)- For Approval
--My first charart. I did the best I could. Comments =) Darkmoon25'

She is completely white. Don't worry, when I started making charart, I would be that with white cats too. You need to make it a light gray, because if it's totally white, then shading won't work. Do you know how to shade? Because if not I could teach you.-- ♥Halloweenclaw 13:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

There's a few blurry sections of Lineart, and the shading should probably be thickened a bit. I can't see anything. XD (But that might be just me) The ear pink should be blurred out, and in a triangle shape. But don't worry, it's pretty good for your first charart! :) Just a suggestion; If you already know this, i'm very, very sorry. But you should go to http://pixlr.com/editor and use that. Using that program you can use the blur tool to blur shading and ear pink (Be careful not to go over lineart, and if you do, just open up paint and go over the black lines with the pencil tool) and you can use the 'Burn' tool to darken parts, etc. Once again, I'm very sorry if you already knew about pixlr. =)  Shistar BOO! 15:16, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Shigura covered it all.-- *Minn owc law*  15:17, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

On the one cheek and behind the ear, it is lighter than the other spots. --Mosspath  of Skyclan 15:29, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

For shading, use the burn tool. (if you already know this, ignore me), and run it over the back, hind leg, and other places that have shading. --Rainwhisker 09 19:25, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

Okay, the lines that were blurred are a bit too thick now. And there still isn't any shading. XD (I checked. XP) There should be a few white pixels in the eye, (Look at Ferncloud's eye to see how it should look) And the ear pink should still be more triangular and blurred along the outside. =)  Shistar Mai Talk Page! =) 17:22, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

There are only still some white parts near her face and her ear.-- *Minn owc law*  23:13, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25'

(S) - Maybe it's me, but the eye looks turquoise. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 17:29, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

hmm... my main problem is that you've now made her so far off-white that she looks pale grey... =/ Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 18:40, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Make the shading darker also, and blur the ear pink slightly as it looks like it is now painted on. (ps. please sign with ~ so we can see the timestamp, thanks) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:35, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, pretty much what Sandy said. Also, to make her less pale gray, use the dodge tool at about size 70, and the brush that gets lighter out. (Please disregard if you knew this.)-- Mossy SC  22:33, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

re uploaded. I lightened her and darkened the shading. also changed eye color. finally i Blurred the ear pink. please approve this! Darkmoon25

I don't know, she still looks pale gray to me--Nightfall101 23:40, November 10, 2009 (UTC) I dont see anywhere she is pale grey. Except for the shading.Darkmoon25

(S) - I can tell you changed the eye, but maybe make it a darker green, like on her warrior image. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:18, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25

I have a few things and although I don't often do them, I've drawn you a diagram (yay!) to help show you what I mean.

Okay: the red circle shows where I don't think you need the shading as it wouldn't go around the whole lineart of the tail. The purple shows where you need to add shading, the blue shows where the lieart is blurred. You also need to blur all the shading into the pelt as it's quite messy. The background needs to be made transparent and the ear pink is too bright (I put a patch of the colour I would recommend next to the ear although there are other colours that can be used on white cats and look good) Hope this helps =) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 13:16, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

ReuplodedDarkmoon25

Darken the belly shading more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:46, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 Darkened the belly shading

Almost there. Just blend the shading and make the ear pink more triangular and she'll be ready, I think. [Note: you don't have to upload under a new file name each time, just choose a name that's something like: Whitewing.queen.png or Whitewing(Q).png or Whitewing_Q.png and reupload over the old one each time instead of having whitewingqueen2, whitewingqueen3 etc. These extra files just clog up the wiki] Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:43, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Ok i will get to that. But I tried to upload files on the old image but my changes are not being shown. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

Sometimes it takes a few minutes to change. I find that often mine don't change for a couple of days: I'm not quite sure why but it may be something to do with temporary files stored on your computer, or it may just be the wiki being slow. The best person to ask would be Eu. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 11:16, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 It showed my changees! Anyways I blended the shading and change the ear pink shape. Is it ready?!=)

(M) - Almost. There's a bit of blurred lineart on the tail, and the shading on the belly looks darker than the rest. Also, the ear pink is too bright and needs blurred more. Fix those things and then she should be good. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 21:52, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I dont see any blurred lineart but i will work on the other stuff later tonight.<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

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Just think the shading on the belly a bit and blur it, and she'll be ready. :) Nice job. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:27, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 blurred belly shading.

I think it needs to be blurred a tad more.-- Darkhallows 11:08, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 This has gotta be ready now.

Make the ear pink a little bit thicker at the bottom of the ear pink so that it's similar to the lineart of the ear pink. Also, this may just be my laptop, but I think this still looks like a light gray. Run the dodge tool over it once or twice (making sure the eye color stays the same and doesn't get lighter) and it should be good. --  Icy -chan  01:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

OK i will try to thicken the ear pink. and on my computer it does not look gray. Why does everybody have to find problems with my art just when it was gonna get approved? any way how do u like my Christmas siggie?<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

It does look a little grey to me too. People find problems with your art because they're trying to help you improve it for the benefit of the wiki; it's not a personal thing. (Also, nowhere here can I see that it was about to be approved) And yes, your siggie is cool. I need a christmas one, I'm feeling left out ^_^ Sandy   Talk   16:44, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Lightningpelt- For approval
A minor character. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 00:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

The white streak on her back would probably be on the lineart, rather than on the side of the pelt like it is now. Otherwise, great job, Hawkfire! -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 01:26, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Icethroat, and also make the ear pink more of a fine triangular shape, and less of a bright pink color. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦ <font color="Purple">Contribs 01:49, November 9, 2009 (UTC) Awesome! Um I don't really see anything *goes closer* Nope &#91;&#91;User:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;background:silver; color:goldenrod;&quot;&gt;&#39;&#39;&#39;Icestorm&#39;&#39;&#39;&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;sup&gt;&#91;&#91;User Talk:Icestorm123&#124;&lt;span style=&quot;color:blue;&quot;&gt;How&#39;s the prey running?&lt;/span&gt;&#93;&#93;&lt;/sup&gt; 02:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Make sure you make it slightly smaller, as we probably wouldn't be able to see it all. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:04, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the streak on the back, and worked on her stripes and ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 19:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

nice work. but now I can hardley see the streak. maybe make it a bit bigger and longer. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

Your tabby stripes seem to be blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:56, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 23:11, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok the image still looks good. but I can hardly see the ear pink and the streak looks more like a patch now then a streak. But good job <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25

This hasn't been updated in awhile. Please update soon.-- Darkhallows 11:04, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 19:36, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart around the neck area, and the lineart on the back is a bit too thin. Also, the ear pink is touching the bottom of the ear when it should be a fine triangular shape, kept inside the ear lineart. Fix these things, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Snowfur (Q): For approval
Well she died as a queen so here ya go.



Comments? --Bluestar1776 22:23, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Some of the lineart on her ears are blurred a lot, and I can barely see any color on her nose. Also, there definately has to be some shading, and I would maybe blur the gray on the ear that's farthest from us (her left ear), it looks like a circle--Nightfall101 22:27, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - sharpened ears, darkened nose. --Bluestar1776 23:17, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Add color to the nose, make the lineart on her hindleg and her front leg that is closest to us black, and lighten the eyes. Also add shading. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 02:38, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened lineart, colored nose. --Bluestar1776 16:03, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Drumroll, please!! *drumroll drumroll drumroll* Thanks, Echo, for showing me how to do the shading! --Bluestar1776 19:21, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I an kind of see that there is shading but you need to darken it slightly. Use the burn tool and rn it over a few times. Then use the blur tool to blend the shding in. Also, the ear pink needs to be more triangular Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 16:15, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened shading, fixed ear pink. Lol, is it blurry enough for you? Hahaha I'm just kidding it sucks. --Bluestar1776 17:12, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I put up two versions. The second one is a thousand times better, in my opinion. --Bluestar1776 17:29, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

I still can't really see the shading on either version and you've now blurred the lineart... more noticeably on version1. Use the burn tool to darken the shading and then fix the blurred lineart. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:03, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart, mostly on the forepaws and belly. And you don't need to put the image at the end of the section, because the changes appear above. And don't forget to leave your sig so we know who you are. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:10, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Don't know if it's just my computer, but it looks like her shading turned into spots on top of her spine. don't know if it just me or not. --Honeyrose34 23:35, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

You're right about the shading Honeyrose. Try and brush it up a little, make it straighter and more even. --Nightfall101 03:15, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - fixed the shading. --Bluestar1776 19:11, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Looking good. But I would lighten the shading on her belly and chest, it looks like it's gray there instead of just shaded--Nightfall101 21:59, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - should I lighten it any more? --Bluestar1776 22:11, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's coming along great! Try and even it out on back though, it still looks a little bumpy--Nightfall101 22:14, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - lightened the shading on the back. --Bluestar1776 22:19, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I have to eat dinner, will work on it more after. --Bluestar1776 22:21, November 17, 2009 (UTC)



The red is where the lineart is blurred, and the blue is where the shading needs to be darkened--Nightfall101 22:58, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I fixed the areas you said to. Better? --Bluestar1776 00:22, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It's getting a lot better! But, all the shading still needs to be both thickened and darkened--Nightfall101 00:27, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - darkened the shading on the back. --Bluestar1776 00:51, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, but it's still hard to see. Thicken the shading on the back and tail, and try straightening it--Nightfall101 00:54, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I don't know what you mean by "thicken", but I did my best. --Bluestar1776 02:09, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Is the gray on the ear tip shading? It looks very sudden. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 14:48, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

It's not shading, Snowfur is supposed to have gray tipped ears. But the shading really needs some work, it looks bumpy and uneven--Nightfall101 21:15, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 23:33, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

The shading isn't as bumpy anymore, but it still needs to be evened out--Nightfall101 22:21, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you should get rid of the images that aren't being improved. I'm not really sure which one I should look at.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:20, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? --Bluestar1776 14:51, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, the shading looks much better. But there is a spot at the base of the tail that's to dark, lighten it up a little. Also, you seem to have forgotten to put pupils in her eyes --Nightfall101 22:33, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I lightened that, and she does have pupils. --Bluestar1776 00:23, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

She's almost there. Just blur the shading a tad more (be careful not to hit the lineart) and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:31, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. Anything else? --Bluestar1776 19:47, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

I hate to keep commenting about this, but I can hardly see the shading anymore--Nightfall101 00:23, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well Nightfall, I think that may be your imagination. I know because one time you told me to fix the shading. I didn't do ANYTHING and posted "reuploaded" and you said it was much better. I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Bluestar, this isn't about catching other users out, it's about getting good quality images for the articles. This project is a team. Teams trust each other and if you said you'd reuploaded then it is assumed you've actually made the changes... I can't see the shading much either so you need to make it darker. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:01, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well it's just that every time I change it it's to dark, then I change it again and it's too light. Then I don't change it all and it's PERFECT. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Reuploaded - Too dark now? -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

(S) - Could you blur the shading a bit more? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:50, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

It should be blurred more, I think.-- Darkhallows 11:09, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred it, but you can't really see it... -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

The ear pink colour is too bright. Make it like the colour in  Sandy <span style="font-family:Freestyle Script;color:Goldenrod;"> Talk   20:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - fixed ear pink, is it too big? -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

The ear pink looks fine. Thicken the shading on the back some more, make the eyes look more like the eyes on Willowpelt's queen image, Lilyfur, or Splashheart, and part of the lineart on the belly looks blurred. Otherwise, great job! -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:52, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Logfur-For Approval
This is Logfur. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:46, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the stripes or lighten the pelt because it's hard to see them.-- *Minn owc law*  20:18, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the image looks very dark and very red and there seems to be some paler grey/white on the lineart. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:25, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

The image is really really dark. The image needs lightened a lot. Try the dodge tool on 100% size 100 or 200, so you get the entire image. Use the tool about three or four times, or maybe six or seven. Until you think it's bright enough, which you'll probably know. Also, the lineart does look gray in some areas. From what I can see of it, though, the tabby stripes look very nice. -- Icethroat21 Enter at risk 02:49, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat, it's waaaaay to dark. And I do see the gray lineart. But I really like the stripes!--Nightfall101 05:38, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

It did say Dark Brown but it looks like this is to dark :) I will do this ASAP. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:28, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Waaaaay to dark, I can barely see the stripes. The shading is good, though. --Bluestar1776 19:04, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I've brightened the brown colour, and removed the gray from the outline (replaced with black). Hope that's okay :) - Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:00, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Now it looks somewhat reddish rather than dark brown. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:07, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

I agree w/ Rainwhisker, maybe make it just plain dark brown, not to bright, not too dark. Do get what i am saying, my friends say that i talk like i'm from a diff country! Anyway, just don't make it too red looking. --Honeyrose34 23:32, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

I've made the fur more brown now. Let me know what you think :) - Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:23, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It looks redddish brown now. Try changing the color altogether instead of lighting it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;gold; background:darkblue; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:gold;">Darkmoon25 It looks brown to me, so I'd have trouble making it look more brown :). The RGB for it atm is 59-37-16 which is about the right ratio as far as I'm aware. - Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:58, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It looks better now, great job Bramble!! ( is okay if i call you that? just checking!) --Honeyrose34 00:23, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Honeyrose, you might not want to call Brambleclaw that because the fantastic leader of this project is a user named Bramble. I was confused and thought that you were mistaken when I saw the post and I think other people with be.-- *Minn owc law*  01:42, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

lol you can all call me Shruggy if you feel like it :) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:11, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is a very strange colour. Try looking at some approved cats and choose a different shade. Um... I think Tigerstar is a good example Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:03, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy but if I try it goes brown...:/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:12, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

hmm....as he's a darkbrown cat I did the ear like a black cats ear. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:11, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, don't worry. Can you just blend it a tiny weeny bit and this should be good for approval. =) Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:33, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

OK. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:42, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * Better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:33, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are layered right over the shading; they're lighter than the pelt, while in the regular pelt area, they're darker. The stripes around the mouth look odd, as well. -- Bramble -san  03:52, November 26, 2009 (UTC)


 * Oh no thats bad it rebooted but I had not saved logfur :/ I will see what I can do :). Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:05, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week, Shruggy. Please update or it will have to be declined Sandy   Talk   19:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry this has been so long. Better?

uhh..that was me. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 09:01, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) - For Approval
Technically he died as a deputy, so here ya go. What do you think?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:07, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He's GGOD!!just add more the shading, and blur the ear pink. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#ff1493">Talk 04:12, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

He needs a little more shading, and possibly highlights. Right now he looks flat.(I shouldnt say that, because the computer screen is flat) Ok, he looks 2-D.-- Shad owed  heart  12:59, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The eyes don't have a pupil/highlight. --Bluestar1776 15:57, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and the lineart on the hind leg that is furthest from us is blured. --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 03:32, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading, blurred the ear pink, and fixed the hind leg. He already has a highlight in his eye. I sort of made a highlight at the top of his head, but I'm having a little trouble with them.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  16:19, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like you darkened the shading rather than thickened it. Can you thicken it some more?-- Ashshadow My Clan 21:55, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well I darkened and thickened it, but I'll thicken it some more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:53, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

You need to add a bit more color to the eye, and add a pupil/highlight. Here's an example: (Don't critcize, I just made this in like 2 minutes and didn't bother with shading.) Anyway, see how his eye has more color? Lol sorry meh image ended up a little higher than yours. --Bluestar1776 22:02, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Er, I can't see the image.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  06:22, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Try using this as a reference on how to do the eye: --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Purple; background:Thistle;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Purple;">Hawktalon Talk 16:34, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thickened the shading and fixed the eye.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:05, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the eye looks goo, but the shading needs blending. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:34, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Ignore me if you want to, but the eyes look kind of red to me. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 12:54, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the midriff, and the eye does look reddish, make it look more like the color of Lionblaze or Cora's amber eye color. Also, the shading could be blurred some more, it still looks bumpy in some spots. Otherwise, great job! --  Icy -chan  03:27, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the eye more orange-ish, and blurred the shading as much as I could.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  22:51, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The midriff still needs shading. Look at Bluefur's deputy image, or Ratscar for shading on the midriff. --  Icy -chan  22:02, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Ah, yes, now I see what you mean by midriff.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:01, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Daisyheart-- For Approval!
Here's my 1st, well...2nd. Besides that here's Daisyheart. Not fond of the name but thought she would be easy for me. Comments? Concerns? --Honeyrose34 00:16, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is a huge improvement! I would maybe thicken the shading a little more, and there's a line of white running through her whiskers where it should be ginger. Also, there is a lot of blurred lineart--Nightfall101 00:20, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Good job Honeyrose. I think you used the thumbnail version instead of the full size for the blank. Can you make it bigger?-- Ashshadow My Clan 00:29, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, i honestly don't know how, i didn't even realize till you said that. I just uploaded it up and it just did that. Please tell me how!! --Honeyrose34 00:31, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else, still don't know about picture size...--Honeyrose34 00:35, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

There's still some blurred lineart, and I can a spot that needs to be blurred right around the base of the tail--Nightfall101 00:41, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Okay how to make the Charart bigger (sorry you have to re-do it) You click on the blank on the PCA Project page. Then it will bring you to a page. You click on the blank again (left click) press "save picture as" then do what you nomarlly do. (Does this spund confusing?) I hope this helped you! <font color="#0000ff" style="background:Lime">Icestorm <font color="#add8e6" style="background:Blue">May StarClan Light Your Path! 00:47, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Icestorm-- i DO do that. I didn't have a problem with Whiskerpaw before. See him in the #25 declined at the bottom. You'll see what i mean.

Nightfall-- i don't know what you mean about the tail need to be blurred thing. Could you maybe upload my Daisyheart and then circle it or something, i don't understand.

Okay, any MORE comments!? --Honeyrose34 00:52, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I can post the full sized blank to your talk page if it would help.-- Ashshadow My Clan 01:01, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

That would be great. You know, this is the 2nd time you offered to save my butt. I thank you SO much. Do any of my real friends at school help? No, they don't like Warriors, only Twilight. Exept for one kid. I don't know what she like's to read. Back to the real world, thanks Ashshadow!!! --Honeyrose34 01:08, November 21, 2009 (UTC)



The red shows where the lineart is blurred--Nightfall101 01:22, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I managed to make it large for you, I did have to redo the eye, because the resizing killed it. I hope you don't mind.-- Darkhallows 11:39, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Shady: How on earth did you resize it without blurring it? I have longed to know how to do that. Honeyrose: The shading needs to be thicker and needs to be on the white as well as the ginger areas - try making your white slightly off-white so shading will show up. Also, blend your shading. The ear pink needs to be a central smallish triangle of a rosy/salmon pink colour ad blurred. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:19, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

The edges were a little blurred, so I just made it a little bigger then the lineart and erased them. If that makes any sense.-- Darkhallows 11:52, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

!!!!!!!! I'm so excited! Thanks SO SO SO much! This helped me a WHOLE lot better, Shady. I'll fix the blurred spots Sandy and Nightfall. I know, i wasn't able to reply yesterday, but i went to see New Moon. It was really got but long because we had a half hour of credits to wait for more and more people to come in. Man, it took a long time but it was totally worth it!!! --Honeyrose34 15:35, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I was just editing her when i saw that i didn't blur the line art, the line art black just messed up the ginger when i was bluring. I'm right now trying to fix it. Sorry 'bout that kind of confusion! --Honeyrose34 15:43, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Forget my last comment, i almost forgot that Shady redid it for me. Man, i'm really dumb........... Sorry again. I'm on a roll w/ these 'sorrys'! --Honeyrose34 15:46, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -the new image is at the top. i just darkened the shading a tad. Any more comments? --Honeyrose34 16:02, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Still needs more shading. Then she should be good.-- Darkhallows 23:37, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Don't know if the shading that's new showed up or not so i'll redo it if i need to. any other comments besides that??? --Honeyrose34 21:20, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments, anyone? I need to get at least another comment! --Honeyrose34 22:36, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink, so darken it, and blur the ear pink. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 13:29, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the patches a bit more and darken the shading. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:37, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Didn't do ear pink but wanted to see your opinion of the shading before i do do it. I think it's too dark now, but that's for you guys to decide! Comments?? --Honeyrose34 21:10, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yep, the shading's too dark, and is really messy. Look here to see how to do the shading. (For the white part of the fur, put the burn tool on highlights at about 12 percent opacity.) I hope this helps! --  Icy -chan  23:06, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Icethroat, I don't know what you mean about the white fur shading, and I don't have highlights anyway. The shading tips on your page weren't that helpful 'cause I already did that but the white was just the problem. Could you or somebody else explain to me what you meant about the ' 12 percent thing. --Honeyrose34 16:21, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

If you're using pixlr or another similar editing programme you need to choose the burn tool and choose a size of around 15. What Icethroat is saying is that you need to select 'highlights' which is a type of burn tool and change the opacity to 12. If you're using pixlr this will all be at the top of the screen once you've selected the burn tool. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 17:11, November 26, 2009 (UTC) D

Do what Sandy said. And sorry I put another Daisyheart up for approval D:! I didn't even see yours up for approval. I promise it won't happen again. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 17:56, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

That's okay, Sandwich!! Everybody makes mistakes! Maybe you just didn't see it reserved, 'cause I'm WAY at the bottom since I'm new!! --Honeyrose34 15:28, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Now blur the shading. (I feel bad for saying that so much.)-- Darkhallows 11:12, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The shading just looks like bumpy gray lines. Even it out and blur it. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

Reuploaded-- Hope that's better. Comments?? --Honeyrose34 21:19, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Better but the shading on the orange patch on her back looks really dark. also the shading needs to be blurred more.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:02, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Snaketooth - For Approval
My first one!!!! Criticism WANTED!!!!! I'm trying to learn as much as I can to improve him. . . comments?--Mousetalon 18:36, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

This is actually pretty good for a first attempt =) I have a few things to mention though: 1)He is described as a dark brown tabby - could you make his fur colour a little darker? Something like the colour of Tigerstar, Voletooth or Toadfoot. 2) The tabby stripes are good, but there are a couple that look a little odd such as near the base of his tail - just tweak it to make it more of a natural shape. 3) This needs shading, or more shading. There are a few different styles so have a look at some approved pixels for inspiration! The main different styles are: Mousefang, White-eye and Runningwind. 4) The ear pink needs to be smaller and more of a rosy colour. See Brightheart. 5) The highlights need to be a little bigger and blended a lot more. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 19:15, November 21, 2009 (UTC) '''

Reuploaded''' Darkened him A LOT. Can't see the tabby stripes too well, but I think it's better. Shaded as well and fixed the ear.--Mousetalon 23:46, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know, I just did, but I wanted better highlights and tabby stripes.--Mousetalon 23:56, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

The front of him is really blurry.-- Ashshadow My Clan 00:07, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Un-blurred him a bit. Better?--Mousetalon 00:50, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry by the front of him I ment the lineart in the front. That still needs to be fixed-- Ashshadow My Clan 00:54, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

OH!!!! Let me fix that! Reuploaded I think that's good.--Mousetalon 01:23, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

The cat needs eye color. right now, it's just black. Make it like blue, green or amber. if the page doesn't say, just do one of the randomly. --Honeyrose34 16:04, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gave him amber eyes, they looked better than blue or green.--Mousetalon 19:14, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Great job. I see that the one tabby mark near the center of his flank seems.....hollow. I don't know if that makes sense or not it seems like it was kind-of painted. if you don't know what i mean, just ask. --Honeyrose34 21:12, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed it. Thanks, I think that happened when I was fixing the blur on his chest.--Mousetalon 21:17, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - His eyes need a pupil. Try looking at some of the approved warriors for help. Mossfire &amp; Steatlhfire 22:02, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded There. --Mousetalon 22:25, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

The shading seems sort of blotchy.-- Darkhallows 23:29, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

How should I fix it? --Mousetalon 03:04, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

For the blotchy shading, use the blur tool and run it over the blotchy areas. The bottom of his left fore paw (the one closest to us) is a little blurred. It looks great! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 13:28, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedThanks a lot! I think I fixed that part. . . anything else?--Mousetalon 19:39, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart on his chest and front paw closest to us looks thin.-- Ashshadow My Clan 01:59, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedBetter? I fixed the shading a bit too. :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

(M) - Very good. However, the ear pink is too light (Look at Tigerstar's image) and the lineart on his chest looks blurred. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:35, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded AGAIN Better? I've reuploaded this nine times. Do we need to go for ten? :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

The lineart is blurred/missing in some spots.-- Darkhallows 11:13, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I got really annoyed with him, so I completely re-did him. Reuploaded :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

(M) - This looks wonderful. The only thing is, what's that scar on his haunch for? Sure he broke his leg, but that will no doubt heal and it wouldn't scar. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:19, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

What scar? Oh! My bad!!! I think that happened when I was putting in the ear pink! Mousey Chat

Lol. Also, could you please make the eye like this: File:Eyediagram.jpg Bramble  -san  23:28, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope I did it right. . . Mousey Chat

Err, no. Add two black pixels, one on top of the other, on the left side. Then, where it looks like two stairs on the eye lineart, add another black pixel to the bottom of the lower stair. Then, on the right side, get rid of the two first upper black pixels, and then all the rest of the pixels necessary to leave one vertical line right next to the colored part of the eye.

If that was way too confusing, I can just do it for you. But you'll have to learn how. -- Tinsel claw  22:52, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

It made absolutely no sense, so I clicked on the eye diagram again, erased everything on the eye but the color, and drew it from there. I think I got it this time. . . :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined

This looks good to me. Comments before approval? Sandy  Talk   19:43, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Yup, much better. Just add some shading on the tail (a highlight on the top would be good), and this should be ready. Great job! --  Icy -chan  01:10, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and done.-- Tinsel talon 09:13, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I didn't even notice Sandy's comment when I posted mine...but anyways, this is ready. Repeating comments before approval? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:52, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reedfeather- For Approval
My second tabby. Comments?-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:01, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. I like the type of tabby stripes that you used. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 23:02, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Love it! I don't see anything right now. Keep it going! --Honeyrose34 23:05, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes on his hind paw that's closest to us should probably be blurred a little more. But this is great!--Nightfall101 23:21, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for all the nice comments. As for the stripes on the hind leg, it's the way their blurred that makes it look unblurred. They're so small that blurring them more dosent make a difference.-- Ashshadow My Clan 23:31, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

I think this is ready. Comments before approval? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:39, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a lot more shading. On the head and neck area especially. -- Bramble -san  03:39, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Should I darken the shading in those areas?-- Ashshadow My Clan 15:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the highlight some. Is it better?-- Ashshadow My Clan 01:54, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really see the shading, add more.-- Darkhallows 11:15, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?-- Ashshadow My Clan 20:11, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Either darken the shading, or add a couple of highlights. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:53, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the highlights some more. Better?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:56, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blossompaw- For Approval
I tried to match Blossomkit's picture the best I could. Meh. What do you think of her? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 01:37, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

She's BEAUTIFUL (lol i almost spelled it wrong)Honey!!! All I see is add shading. ★ Hi dd en sun <font color="#ff1493">Talk 01:39, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome!! This looks better than the kit picture i think. It looks like on the kit one that she got sprayed w/ mud! Besides the kit picture, nice! All i see is maybe make the ear pink a tad darker and bigger. I can't see it that well.--Honeyrose34 21:11, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, guys! Is this better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:20, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be on there. --Honeyrose34 21:43, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

I actually had shading, but I guess it was just too light. XD Sorry about that, guys. Better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:51, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the patches of fur, but otherwise it's au-mazing!!!!! :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

Thanks, Mousey! How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 00:43, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I know you've heard this a lot, but blur the patches and darken the shading even more. Then she'll be ready. :) Nice job. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:41, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, guys. I've been having a bit of uploading trouble lately, which is why my changes haven't been showing up; but as soon as I figure out what's wrong, I'll fix her. ;) -- Angelstar Silver Bells 00:30, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Oopsy. =) Didn't see Bramble's message until after I posted the above message. =D Lol. Is this better? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 02:07, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I think this looks really good, add some shading to the white fur (the belly and hind leg) and this should be ready. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:55, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I agree- it looks really good. Well done!-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:28, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Better? -- Angelstar Silver Bells 00:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Dovestar-For Approval
This is Dovestar. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:25, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Nice work! Just lighten the shading a little bit. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 14:32, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

better? hope it's not to light :/. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 15:45, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. Just darken the ear pink a little and he should be good to go. The ear pink is really bright. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Hawkfire Talk! 16:18, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:31, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is still a tad too bright and it's too big. --Honeyrose34 21:12, November 24, 2009 (UTC)


 * Better? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 07:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Now the ear pink is purplish. Try making it a light salmon-ish color instead. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 17:40, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

I know things are busy with the holidays and stuff, but please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:00, December 4, 2009 (UTC

yes hmm...I'm not sure how to get that color..:/ help? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Just run a pinkish color over the ear pink and blur it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 19:00, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

mist where sunlight shimmers~for approval
== well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it?? *santa pool*  07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --  Icy -chan  20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  pool*  07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.-- Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also Sandy   Talk   16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --  Icy -chan  21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better?? *Ivy pool*  06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Owlfur- For Approval
This is Owlfur. Not my best work. Comments?-- Ashshadow My Clan 02:28, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, add some shading to the paws, and blur all of the shading, it looks messy right now. Great job, though! --  Icy -chan  15:58, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink some more and added shading to the front leg. The shading on the rest of the body was already blurred to the max so any ideas on how to make it look less messy.-- Ashshadow My Clan 16:18, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Might want to dull the ear pink color, it's really bright. But other than that, awesome! :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

Reuploaded Darkened earpink. Can someone delete the original file?-- Ashshadow My Clan 20:06, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and blend it. -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:39, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded (I think) Better?-- Ashshadow My Clan 21:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the muzzle, and then it should be good. --  Icy -chan  03:32, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:42, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with it now.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:30, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy  Talk   19:45, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Foxleap (W) -for Approval
Heees back up again because TFA came out! Yay! He was gathering dust in my files...-- ♥Sha dow edh eart♥  ♥Meow♥ ♥Prey♥  14:41, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

The image itself looks great, but it looks nothing like his apprentice image. His apprentice image and his warrior image should have the same style of tabby stripes. (It seems reasonable to do it that way.) But as I said, the image itself looks great! --  Icy -chan  16:03, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Icy's right. Is there any other cat this could be instead? Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:43, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

It's a shame that he can't be Foxleap cuz this picture rocks! It's excatly how I picture him!--Nightfall101 05:09, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I searched everywhere for a reddish brown tabby, and a reddish brown cat. Unfortunately, I didn't find any. There was only Pinestar, Oakheart (who has a charat), and Foxleap. If you remove the tabby stripes, you could use this as Oakheart's warrior image. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 22:47, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

We're really going for consistency here... If you use the unsaturate tool and take the colour out you could turn it into a grey tabby... there are plenty of them. You'd have to add the ear pink ad eye colour again though. I just don't think it's right to have two images that are so different on the same article. Sandy  Talk   16:41, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Crag where eagles nest (CG) For approval
Contsructive critisism?--Evanphoto 18:20, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - He looks rather...bumpy. Try blurring him more. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:23, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Evanphoto 00:28, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

I think you accidentally erased part of the mouth line, and the eye needs a highlight. And blur the shading/highlights more. Good job! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 14:57, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Evanphoto 16:41, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The spance in between the legs should be colored, and he needs mud streaks. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:12, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a while. Please update soon. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:54, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on his chest looks bumpy, try blurring it more.--Nightfall101 06:47, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Oatwhisker(TC)- For Approval
My second one!!!!! Anything I need to improve? :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

(M) - Your highlights are much too bright. Run the burn tool over them a few times. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:20, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed you sig again Mousey: your final span and sup tags were the wrong way around - they have to be in order from inside to out if that makes sense: in pairs. eg wih your content in between... As for the image, looks good =) Make the ear pink a darker reddish colour though.  Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 20:24, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stupid siggy. :( Okay, fixed the highlights, better? :) Mousetalon Call Me Mouse!!!

You still need to do the ear. The highlights look good though Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:41, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Ooops. caps lock. Anything else? :) Mousetalon Call Me Mouse!!!

Um. . . did everyone forget? Is there anything else I need to do? --  :) Jingletalon  Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined

Can you sign with four tidles and not three? There's no time, and what time the posts were posted is actually important. Image-wise, the eye needs to look like it does on your Snaketooth image. --  Icy -chan  00:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Um. . . what do you mean by four tidles? Where do I put them? An let me fix the eyes real quick. . .--Mousetalon 00:27, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Never mind, you got it. When you sign your post, it must have been a typo or something, because the times weren't there. But it's okay now. Also, can you blur the shading anymore? Some parts go from dark to light, and others have the smooth transition with medium color in the middle, so blur it as much as you can. --  Icy -chan  00:40, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it as much as I could.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart right along the bottom of the hind leg--Nightfall101 00:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedI think I got it.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 02:36, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - for approval
hm...is he too dark?-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 00:50, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Much too dark. Try doing more of a blue-gray, like Stonefur's fur. Also, no more than 35 images can be up at a time. This is number 36; please take it down and wait until another image has been approved, then you can put it back up. -- I ♥ R a v e n p a w <font color="Silver">Talk

No, don't to blue-gray. It clearly says he is dark gray like Graystripe. But I agree it's too dark--Nightfall101 02:36, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfal's right, keep it to a gray color, like Stormfur's apprentice image. It's not the fur color that's too dark, it's the shading. The shading is way too dark. Also, make the ear pink more of a reddish color rather than a pink color. --  Icy -chan  03:45, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded -- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 16:32, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is far too bright. Run the burn tool over it a few times and blur it. Might want to make it smaller too. :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

Some pixels of the tail- and leglineart seem to be blurred and there are some white pixels on the tails ground. The shadding looks great by the way. --  Holly... leaf or berry?

The mudstreaks look really unnatural and the ear pink needs to be a slightly more reddish colour. Sandy ~Dragonkit's Forest 12:38, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

can i withdraw this? i don't hink i'm that good at the mud streaks...I might work on him sometime when i'm better...-- '''Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 03:43, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I suppose so, but this was really coming along well--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:50, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (W)- For Approval
I ran out of file names for him. But Hawkey says he's ready. So what do you think? Oh and let me know if the changes don't show up. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 16:33, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Add higlights and blur the shadowing A LOT. Wait, is that the old or new image? <span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:lime; background:magenta;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:lime;">Mousetalon Mousey! :)

I did add highlights. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:39, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Really? Did you use the dodge tool on the head too? :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined

I don't know. I'll do it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:45, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes won't show so I had to change the file name. Not sure if this is better or not <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Salmon; background:Purple;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Blue;">Icestorm Purr all the way! :) 18:53, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Wow no more comments :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 23:48, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Yes there is, more coming at you! :) TGHe lineart looks unnaturally thick and the shading is too thick. Try smudginging the shading towards the linart (careful not to hit it) Gr.. stupid spelling mistakes. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:18, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

How do i un-thicken the lineart? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:39, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded GRRRRRRRRRRRRR had to CHANGE THE FILE NAME! Not sure if this is better or not. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart still looks blurred and thickened...to un-thicken the lineart, I think you make the inside of a blank transparent, and then paste the blank onto the image you already have. (or something like that, I don't know how to do it, though. Maybe someone else could explain a lot better for me?) Also, the shading it too thin on the inside of the hind leg right above the two hind paws, and all of the shading could be darkened some. Otherwise, great job! --  Icy -chan  21:45, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know how to put the blank on the image. But i'll do everything else. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:45, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Icy I don't know how to do that, Please help me do that! Someone! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Here you go. He needs tail shading.-- Darkhallows 00:31, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. Just what color code is this again? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 00:39, December 1, 2009 (UTC) (DECEMBER 1ST!)

Reuploaded I don't know the color code so could somebody tell me? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 21:36, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Wow no more comments. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:14, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

There is a white line on the tail.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 02:16, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I know. I need the color code to fill it in. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 13:04, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Im not sure what a color code is. If you mean those numbers and letters that show up when you change colors(if you use pixlr), use the tool that looks like a dropper.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:30, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah the numbers and letters. Do you mean the blur tool? :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:00, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

No its called color picker tool and looks like a medicine dropper.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 22:04, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 22:17, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, it's way too bright right now. Also, the shading on the hind leg is too thick, try to thin it out some. --  Icy -chan  02:01, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">[[User:Icestorm123|Icestorm 02:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

WOW WOW wow WOW wow'' WOW no more comments. Come on peeps! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:17, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading as possible, and then blur the ear pink (and thin it if possible). Otherwise, great job. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:42, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope this gets approved! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I have a couple of picky things. The ear pink is too dark now, run the doge tool over it a couple of times. Also, can you thin the ear pink on the other side, too? Last but not least, there's a gray line above one of the ears. (I know, they're picky.) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded So when is it approved? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:12, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some, blur the shading, and ighten the shading on the hond leg, it's darker than the rest of the shading. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:45, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink position higher--Nightfall101 06:50, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

How do I lighten the shading? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 12:54, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And run the dodge tool (the black ball next to the burn tool) over the highlights to lighten the shading.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:35, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lighten hind leg shading and blurred ear pink. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:01, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Hareflight- For Approval
Here's Hareflight. Her description looked easy so I took a go at it. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 00:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Christmas! undefined 01:49, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job, Hawkey. Just blur the shading and highlights a bit so that they don't look so messy, and she'll be ready. :) -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 13:31, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the color a little bit more natural, right now it looks dul--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; color:Maroon; Background:Black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Blue;">Minnowclaw 00:35, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened color, and blurred shading and ighlights to the best of my ability. THe upload log works again! :D <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 23:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Coal (Lo) - For Approval
*shrugs* Not much to say about this one. Comments and suggestions? (Does the shading need blurred??) --  Icy -chan  02:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

He's awsome Icy!!! I think that the blurong is good except for the below part of the face. Hidden  -jimgle ♪  21:07, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Hiddensun! I'll get to it either tonight or tomorrow, I'm on my mom's laptop right now, not mine, so I don't have the files to edit. --  Icy -chan  22:04, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job! Just blur the shading like Hiddensun said, and the rear leg farthest from us should be darker. Also, the eye looks kinda red. Great job though! --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 22:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Let mek now if I need to darken the hind leg some more. How's this? --  Icy -chan  00:46, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Love it but i can't really see the ear pink. --Honeyrose34 14:59, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Snowflake - For Approval
I feel like she needs fixing, but I dunno...does she? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;silver; background:pink; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:silver;">~Mistpelt~ 21:32, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I always think that the kits are sooo cute!! Maybe blur the shading more. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:57, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

and make the patches a litle more wavy. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:58, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I found two things. One, the eye color needs to show up better. I don't really see any. And two, the ear pink is too light. Fix those two things and you should be good! -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Swiftstar (L)-For Approval
Is he okay? Warriors808 22:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't bad but you need to blur the shading and highlights. you might also want to add some shading to his left side.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:08, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Are you even online? Great for your first try! Just do what Ashy said and he'll be amazing! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! undefined 23:22, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Also, he needs ear pink --<font color="Blue" style="background:cyan">Spottedwing 00:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The space right between his hind leg and his right fore-arm is white, it needs to be gray--Nightfall101 06:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his leg, it looks. . . smudged. And yes, add ear pink.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) - For Approval
Tortie spree! :D Constructments? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 00:17, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good. Maybe add some white because thats what her description says although it could always be wrong.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 00:28, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ OMG, I'm so stupid... I forgot to add white... >.<. Anyway, better now? -- ♫ Ec h om i st <font color="Indigo">Talk♦<font color="Purple">Contribs 01:44, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Only thing I got is add another shade of green to the eyes. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 12:52, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Great job!! But the white on the tail is bothering me. I really don't think it should be on her tail, but the rest of her is fine. It's just the tail. I kind-of seems unatural to me. Feel free to ignore my comment. -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!

Squirrelfur (W) - For Approval
My second charart. Comments? --  Holly... leaf or berry?

This is incredible! Just two things, first of all I think I can see a gray speck on his belly. And then (This might just be me being picky) but the face looks a little to dark. Maybe lighten up on the shading there?--Nightfall101 20:59, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Holly!!! I agree with Night that the face is kinda too dark. And maybe blur a little the shading and the pink in the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:21, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

i love it! although, i agree also, the face is a bit too dark and shade the ear. Otherwise, its fantastic! -- ♥Shine star♥  23:31, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks =). Better now?  Holly... leaf or berry?

Fallowtail (Q)-For Approval


My first one!! Hope I did okay...I didn't know what her eye color was, so I just put blue. I got rid Of Dovepaw, because Minnowclaw was going to do her, and she just didn't look good. Any comments? -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 21:53, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The color is good but I can tell that the lineart showed up with a black bg. When that happens to me I paste the image into a word document before pasting and saving it in paint. Why not try that, otherwise this is good for your first one.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:53, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

I'll try that thanks!! I try it later cuz I have to get off... -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:05, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

As of my last check, I believe Minnowclaw is doing Dovepaw. Could you please resumbit this as another cat? It should be fairly easy; there are lots of gray cats. -- Tinsel claw  22:32, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

If you added gray flecks the cat could become Fernpaw, but we're not supposed to do other ranks for cats already with chararts, as Tinselclaw (or Bramble?) says. The lineart looks like it's been thinned, as in some areas there is no lineart at all. Try thickening it and see what happens. --<span style="color:DarkGreen; background:Red; font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">Rainwhisker 09 22:45, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

She looks pixely. Try redo-ing it and save it as a PNG image. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 02:12, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights. -- :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! 21:55, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Thanx, Icy! I'll try! -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 22:00, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added Shading and Highlights on this one I think...I'm new at this and I don't have a mentor, so I quessed at what highlighting is...I think that Fallowtail looks mottled now..:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 23:12, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

She looks kinda pink to me. Maybe it's my computer.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:15, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay 1. Don't change the file name 2. Highlights you use the dodge tool at 5 or 7 (square not circle) And go over the chest,the front paw,the head,the muzzle, and the tip of her tail. Then change it to size 30 (faded circle) and put one on the hind leg and everywhere else just make sure their together. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:34, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again now I know how to shade and highlight. Thanx, Icy, buddy!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:15, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded again and again Comment please...-- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

You use the burn tool to shade. Once you got that blur the shading and highlights into the pelt. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:41, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Shiningheart (W) - For Approval
I tried a Goldencloud style on this...and epicly failed. ;( Comments and suggestions needed! --  Icy -chan  02:22, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Woah! Swirly=) The stripes that are right above the hind leg, the ones that make a circle, look a little strange, and there's a little bit of blurred lineart below them. And it looks as if there are a few white pixels on her tail, right a long the lineart--Nightfall101 02:51, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, I'm just an apprentice so my opinion does not count as much as a warrior, but I agree with Nightfall, The stripes are sort of circley (is that a word?) so if it is a tabby or not, you may want to fix those (plus the line art has some little gaps) -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 20:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if this looks any better or not; personally, I think it looks worse. I was trying to make it look sort of like this, but I think I failed...I'll try a different type of tabby stripes and put it on the right, and get it up soon, and then everyone can help me decide which one to keep. I should get it up soon... (Oh yeah, I got my holiday sig. What do you all think of it?) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:17, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, both versions are up. Which one is better? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:41, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I like the second one better -- ♥Shine star♥  01:49, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the second one is much better. But the stripe on her head looks very thick. Maybe thin it out a little--Nightfall101 01:53, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I'll blur the stripe on her head tomorrow. For now, I must sleep. ;) Anyways, I've got just the second image up for approval now, I like it much better than the first as well. :) (Any more comments on the image, as well as comments on my new Christmas sig?) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:18, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Think I got it... -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:03, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, that's much better! I'd blur the shading on her chest though--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 04:09, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Star That Shines On Water (CG) For Approval
This is my first Charart. EPIC FAIL on my part... so... comments? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:32, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

You're not supposed to change the size on the blank so the image is too big.Also the eye dosent look fully colored-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 21:36, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, how's this? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 21:45, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Now it looks pixely and small. Make it bigger. Blur the shading and highlights and earpink. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! 21:48, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 22:08, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Now it just looks large,try re-doing this and the shading isn't blurred.Add highlights with the dodge tool. The shading looks un-even try smudging the shading toward the lineart with (Be careful not to hit it) with the smudge tool. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglestorm 'Merry Purry Christmas ! 22:14, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Also,add mud streaks <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:56, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Just start over like Icestorm said. The pixel needs to be its original size, or it won't work. -- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 19:12, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

let me guess you use MC paint well 1 tip don't make any picture you finished and saved big it will mess it up and question in general i thought Star was a nursing queen and she was silver not brown unless erin hunter said or as she appered it said a BROWN cat came i would get it! --Echopaw 22:48, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I looked it up. She is brown but Echopaw is right she is a kit-mother. Sorry-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 23:03, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

it said on her page that she would return to her duties aas a CAVE GUARD once her kits were grown, so I made her in her cave guard form thingy... -- Nightwhisker98 Merry Christmas :D 01:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

But it said she died.Idk maybe her page is wrong-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:23, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

why not ad a nursing queen but if you don't want to that is fine and add mud blended on her fur --Echopaw 01:49, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, Star was the one that was taken and presumably eaten by Sharptooth. (I swear my heart broke in two when I read that part) She died as a kit-mother, so her blank should be a kit-mother--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Briarpaw (A) - for approval


Ok, NOW this might be my best image I ever did. So comments. (And again, my apologies to Honeyrose for doing the same image as her). <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Oh Shoot! She already has a kit image! Bramble, do itake this down or can I can leave it up. If I can, I pormise I will only do cats without images. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:10, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

This can stay up, she already has a kit picture, she needs an apprentice picture. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:39, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

No worries, cats with their status updated in TFA are getting new images. For the image, this is very good. Lighten the ear pink, and this should be good. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:40, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, Sandwich. It's really no problem. I really do love this though. I can't see anything at the moment, so keep the good work going!! -- "'Rosey'" "'Happy Leaf-bare!'"

Nightwing (W)-For Approval
My second Charart! Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job!!! Maybe blur the ear more and either make the shading darker or the pelt lighter. Hidden -jimgle ♪  00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

It's AWESOME Icy, but blur the ear pink a little and maybe a couple shades lighter. Otherwise, It lookes great!!:) -- Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! undefined 00:07, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be a bit smaller. It takes up the whole ear. Great job, my apprentice! :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Jinglefire 'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:11, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Um I am trying to full it up to a lighter black but it fills the line-art to! Help! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:14, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still think the earpink is still too big. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

If you use pixlr.com you can either use burn tool to make darker or doge too to make lighter parts. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:06, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

And to blur the ear pink. It's too bright, run the burn tool over it a bit.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 20:16, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! But try making the ear pink more of a purplish-color. Like Fuzzypelt And maybe make it's postion a little higher--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) For Approval
Alright, Hawkfire instructed me to do a gray tabby, and I really thought Silvermask needed a picture, so I hope this is okay Hawkey! Anyway, the stripe on his face was fun to do, I always pictured it that way. Comments?--Nightfall101 04:52, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Once you get this approved you are going to be a warrior! Anyways might wanna blur the shading. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:02, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Really Good! But shouldn't the mark on his face be lighter in color? WoodClan

Not really, WoodClan. It's fine, Nightfall. And WoodClan, are even signed up for this yet? --Honeyrose34 22:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I blurred the shading more. Better?--Nightfall101 23:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good, I love the mask.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 02:32, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Check it out, I finally got a christmas siggie! Any more comments?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:04, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading on the midriff. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:56, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

What's a midriff? (Please don't laugh)--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:59, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I tried to do the midriff, is it better?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 04:52, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Try blurring the midriff some more, and then it should be good. You can just use the image on the right, there's now no need for the one on the left. I like your new sig, by the way. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 05:12, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Night of No Stars (CG) For Approval
Alright, I'm not sure if I can put this up for approval. I may have been mis-reading, but I think the notice at the top says once I have one approved, I can have two up at a time. (Please correct me if I'm wrong) Anyway, here's Night of No stars. I started her like, right after the cave guard blanks were approved, and finished her the next day. I'm pretty proud of it=)--Nightfall101 05:15, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe brighten the highlights just a little bit? Looks really good though.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:40, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good, Nightfall:) Just two things: The background is pink. It should be transparent. Plus, the space between the legs needs to be colored (just the vertical pixel space above the tail and vertical-ish space below the tail; the small pixels inbetween the paws were transparent). Great job on the shading, though:) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color:Green; background:Crimson;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em;color:Green;">Silverbells Merry Xmas! 20:18, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I lightened the highlights, I filled in the white spaces, and is the background better?--Nightfall101 00:11, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Excuse me, but I had Night of No Stars Reseved...check the list please before you reseve-- ♥Sha dow edh eart♥  ♥Meow♥ ♥Prey♥  13:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Sharpclaw(D) - For Approval


I tried the same tabby markings as Crowtail. Comments? Hidden -jimgle ♪  21:27, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Darken earpink <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-fixed the ear. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:09, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

This looks awsome! But maybe add a stripe to the very base of the tail. It looks blank--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 03:42, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thanks!! And I added a stripe on his tail. Hidden -jimgle ♪  03:51, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look awesome, but the fur color looks more of a red color rather than ginger. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:58, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Well there's losts of cats with fur like that or brighter like Squirrelflight and Firestar. Hidden -jimgle ♪  04:06, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

True, but it does look red-brown--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">SNOWFALL Let it snow, let it snow! 04:10, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Starlingpaw (A) - For Approval
Not my favourite image but... Sandy  Talk   21:44, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good Snady!! And I really like the shading you do. All I can see is maybe make the ear darker. Hidden -jimgle ♪  01:58, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading on the hind leg a bit more. It looks really good!!!!!-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 02:33, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Ivypaw- For Approval
I don't know about this one...-- Darkhallows 11:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The gray patches seem smudged. Could you fix that please? -- Rosey Happy Leaf-bare!