Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her front leg. 19:34, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stomach and haunch shading. There's also a strip of shading on the back - blur that, or remove it, since the light source is coming from there. 14:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing yet. 06:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 22:24, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

This could just be me but there is a white pixel on the front left "elbow" (has no idea about anatomy) also lighten the shoulder "highlight" 00:59, 12, 07, 2012

I can see it too. Also, there's an odd strip of unshaded white above that leg. Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Honestly, I think the shading's fine. :/ I fixed that white pixel... And Skt, I don't see any odd strip of shading.. o.o 04:19, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

The "highlight" on the back is really bright and it needs to be blurred. 20:14, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

The highlight is fine.

Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing,  13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to make it match the queen more? 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ 05:38, 11, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded Ikilledit 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still doesn't really match. Also lighten it so you can see the lineart, and add/majorly define the shading. 05:38, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (Ki) ~ Tweaked
I tried his fur needed to be lightened and his stripes needed to be darkened, I also had to change his pink nose to match his apprentice version. The OA was moi. Comments? 18:15, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and darken it.

Reuploaded 19:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could you still define the shading more? 00:38, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the grey a little bit. Skt Omnia vincit amor 00:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

And define the shading a bit more. Unless changes aren't showing. 01:21, 12, 07, 2012

Reuploaded 20:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case the changes aren't showing here he is. 20:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

These stripes don't match the other images in the slightest. I know it's a kit blank and it's harder, but not even the stripe style matches. Would you consider redoing them? 20:59, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the base coat should be much lighter. Breeze whisker  04:22, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, shading needed defined. I'm thinking the stripes might need to have their opacity lowered a tad to match the loner, but that's for you guys to decide 21:47, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think if you blurred the stripes a little, they'd match just fine. Breeze whisker  00:48, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if changes aren't showing, but I still can't see the shading at all. Could you define it more? 21:36, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ehh I think this is too dark, but if it matches, it matches. I also defined the pale belly since apparently it wasn't light enough D: 04:31, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a tad more. (And maybe a few more flecks? It's your choice, though.) 17:02, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Q) ~ Tweaked
Just darkened it to match the other images. Latest change was made by Misty. Comments? ^^ 00:07, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Misty already did this tweak. It doesn't need to be done again... 01:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Misty's tweak was declined due to the one week limit, but it was never reverted. Cinder, blur the stomach shading, please.

Oh, Ok. I just thought it was approved since it was never reverted. :P Darken the highlights a tad. 04:26, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleclaw what do you mean by darken it? XP Sorry I'm not very good with vocabulary. 19:13, July 11, 2012 (UTC)

I believe Paleh means to dull the highlights and blend them in with the pelt more. 01:25, 12, 07, 2012

Re-Uploaded 00:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

If it doesn't make the white look grey, could you darken the shading a little? Breeze whisker  04:20, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Birchstar (RC) (L) - Tweaked
Needed to be light brown, and needed a shading tweak. I just took the image before it was tweaked, lightened it, and put a new layer of shading over that, cause it was much easier. Also added some depth to the eyes. OA was Splook with a tweak by Thistleshine. Comments? 05:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her chest and tail, and make the earpink less purple and more natural. 18:55, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It seem to blend in with the stripes. 21:45, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Instead of darkening the shading, I suggest darkening the stripes; in some parts they're indistinguishable from the base colour. But maybe just define the shading on the tail a little ^^; 00:53, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Rather not darken the stripes. I rather like the lighter stripes, and I don't exactly know how you'd expect me to darken just the stripes anyways. 0.o But it others agree, I'll change them. 05:38, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. The stripes in certian places (Like the chest fur and <--- that side haunch) you can´t really see them, if at all. Also darken the shading a tad. This is wonderful. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   18:25, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes could be darkened a tad just so I don't have to squint to see them? And if you wanted to darken the stripes, couldn't you trace over them with a darker colour on another layer, then blur and mess around wirh the opacity? -lame advice is lame- Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:18, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Best I can do with the stripes. 23:37, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you fill in those missing pixels at her front paws? c: 00:26 Sat Jul 14

Mounty, that's optional. 00:28, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) ~ Redone
OA of the most recent version is Mooneh, and was originally done by Colleen. ( I miss her, btw ) Stripes are matched to the warrior the best I can, and both sets of colors are the same, so don't ask me to change them.

Can you define the shading on his face? 16:13, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine.

Birdy (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Defined the shading and made it whiter dodge tool ilu  OA was Padfoot. Comments? 03:17 Fri Jul 13

Can you blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? 16:21, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

It looks too white. Tone it down a tad. 17:04, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tried a thin layer of black. Hopefully that worked x.x 20:10 Fri Jul 13

It looks good but I would personally like the ears and the little steak on the forehead darkened a tad. The colors are now better. Lot less white. 20:16, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can't darken them as I don't have the layers. I think it's fine. 20:17 Fri Jul 13

It is fine. There's no specified shade for her gray ears and stripe, it matches description fine. Could you make the earpink less purple though? 23:49, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ilu colour adjust  00:23 Sat Jul 14

Minnowtail (Alt.Ki) ~ Tweaked
The shading needed to be darkened. Most recent OA was me. Comments? 14:05, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more, but it might mean that you have to lighten the base color. 07:40, 14, 07, 2012

Mothwing (W) - Tweaked
needed shading darkened. original artist was Shelly. Comments? 14:25, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

I know this isn't why they needed tweaking, but could you define the earpink a tad? 20:41, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:15, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) - Tweaked
same as warrior. changes aren't showing. Comments? 14:26, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

could you define the earpink? 20:42, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Graymist (W) - Redone
Her stripes were unrealistic, shading was blotchy, etc. I didn't have Sumopaint to work with, so this is a pixlr image....and, actually...not half bad. I was the most recent OA. 00:30, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot to remove that last white pixel on the chest, and blur the earpink a bit more. Pretty<3 00:33, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

This is wonderful, but can you add a few more stripes on the tail? 00:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. Especially behind her shoulder. Very pretty. ^^ Breeze  whisker  04:17, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad larger. 16:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Mintfur (SC) (Alt Ki) ~ Tweaked
Just blurred the shading a tad. OA of the most recent was Skye. Comments? 05:21, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a bit and define it. Oh, and I wasn't an OA. I just changed the lineart, since part of the cite was false.

Vlur the sahding on her front legs. 16:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Ki) ~ Tweaked
This guy xD I changed the shading placement. OA was R-face. Comments? 05:53 Sat Jul 14

Cinderheart (Alt. Kit) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and I re-did the shading.

Lighten the paws a tad. 16:45, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Swoop (KM) - Redone
OA was Iceheart22, stripes and mud were inconsistant and the shading needed to be darkened. Took all the colors from the CG. 12:11, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shaing on her haunch and back, and define the stripes in the shaded areas. 16:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)