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Rockshade - Silver Nomination
Mkay, so I'm putting this back up. It was archived a while ago, but I think I had fixed everything up until the point it was archived, at least. So, um, comments? :3 22:26, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to find any quotes that describes him better? Otherwise looks great! 23:39, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd rather go for quality rather than quantity of quotes. 00:16, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, he says a lot, so you should find a good quote for him that describes his personality. 05:05, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well there weren't many good ones left, but I managed to find one better than the first quote I had for him. I think the other two describe his personality fairly well. The second showing his more fierce side, and the third showing his more caring side. :3 22:55, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I guess they're fine... 07:00, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

They're a lot better this time! Nice job! 17:25, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a The Rescue section. 17:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ah geez. xD I don't have that book, so um, can anyone who has it help me with it? :3 15:01, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help. Wild fire  20:48, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looking great, Rainwhisper. ;) But I don't think there should be the word "in" before SkyClan's Destiny in the main quote's caption. Also, in the title for the SkyClan and the Stranger Series, the word "Series" isn't linked to the SkyClan and the Stranger Series page, although some articles such as Sharpclaw's, Tinycloud's, and Clovertail's are. If this isn't a big deal, then there's no need to fix it, but I'm not sure about this so I'm just expressing my opinion. :) 23:50, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed The SKyClan and the Stranger Series section, but the main quote is supposed to be like that. Also, thanks so much Wildfire. ^^ 13:43, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Duskwater ~ Silver Nomination
The history is expanded as much as possible and all the quotes related to her are there too. 05:22, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! If the history is complete and there are enough quotes, I think its ready! 05:35, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's a quote about Sunningrocks when one of them said "We have lost too much already", referring to her, so maybe you could add that to her quotes? 05:39, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't that a bit too general? Well, I guess it counts as a quote. 15:34, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I added that quote now. 15:50, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I found another one and added it. It looks good to me. :D 15:59, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! 18:06, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Then it will probably be CBVed once most votes are closed. 18:40, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Considering no one has commented on this in 20 days, I'm going to go ahead and put up the vote. 01:25, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 15:09, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great to me!!!! 23:12, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Pine ~ Silver Nomination
I added a few quotes. Comments? 01:13, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find one more quote? 01:35, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Added! :D 01:51, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 01:52, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The end spoiler warning cuts off one of the quotes. XD I'll go fix that! 17:26, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think it can be expanded some more. I just read the book, and the parts where he appears can be lengthened. 17:29, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Barely; its only a summary. Okay, then expand a bit. 16:00, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Since I have the book, I just went ahead and expanded it. A lot. Like, 7 long sentences. So, I'm pretty sure it can't be expanded any more. Comments? 16:36, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

A lot better! Nice work! 17:33, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

I believe there should be a comma after Sign of the Moon in the main quote. And under the family section in the character box, the mother and sister parts look messed up. If you can't fix that problem though, just add the comma and I think everything else looks fantastic! ;) 00:43, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not Dapplecloud, but it's fixed anyway. ;) 22:30, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, CBV? 18:21, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up 17:22, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (SHA)- Silver Nomination
There really is nothing more to be done with this article. Cherrypaw is asked by Spottedleaf to show the reader to the StarClan border. That's it. Echostar 16:49, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add the quote where it says that? Maybe that would help expand the article...xD 16:55, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Done! Echostar 17:02, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! 17:36, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! this will be CBVed after more votes close. 17:46, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

With no comments in 17 days, I'm going to put up the vote momentarily. 01:26, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 15:08, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Barley ~ Silver Nomination
I've been expanding it, and I think it's ready! 23:49, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, 4th time this page has been nominated. Hopefully it won't be declined and archived again. xD Can you add more details to The Heart of a Warrior, and Shattered Peace? 16:55, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

The last quote was added by you, right? Its the only quote that has the book link wrong, and the description wrong. It says "dog pack" when its describing the fight against the rats. x) Don't worry, I fixed the quote. xP 16:58, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Right, I knew that. ;) Ok, I'm going to get the books tomorrow, so I'll add it in then. 18:40, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Right, it's going to take a while since I didn't get the books. Hopefully, I'll get them by the 19th or 20th. 23:46, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just be aware, I am still working on this, so don't archive it. 22:29, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Shattered Peace expanded... 02:22, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

A Clan in Need expanded... 17:05, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

The Heart of a Warrior expanded! Anything else I should do? 17:40, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can Forest of Secrets, Midnight, or Dawn be expanded? Otherwise it looks good. 21:00, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded them, but not that much. They can't be expanded anymore. Anything else? 00:04, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. This will probably be on the CBV list. 19:32, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 01:27, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 00:19, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek - Silver Nomination
I filled in the history as much as possible and it looks ready. I'm going to add in a few quotes and a main one, but other than quotes is there anything you'd like to point out? I also have no idea how to grade the talk page correctly...so could someone help with that? Thanks, 22:11, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks good! I changed it to bronze for you. For future reference, you go and edit the talk page. Change it to source, and where it says in , you change it according to this:  - Planned,  - Started,  - Bronze,  - Silver,  - Gold. Hope that helped! 22:42, July 14, 2011 (UTC) 22:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! 22:46, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

I have some style concerns with this, I'm gonna go ahead and fix those real quick (they're just some flow issues and a couple of grammar mistakes), but, as a warrior, can you flesh it out a little more? Could you describe her involvement with the rats a bit? (if I remember right, didn't she get injured?) 21:36, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay 23:44, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Added the involvement with the rats. 00:17, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Check the appearance again; you don't want to miss anything else! XD But other than that, looks good! 02:54, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

I did :P 01:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

There were still some grammar mistakes, but I think I got all of them. 18:45, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! 00:28, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

CBV? 18:22, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Vote's up! 17:22, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Splashkit - Silver Nomination

 * She's expanded to the maximum so I asked, "Why not?" 22:46, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

These chracter pages have to be posted seperately, it says so in the rules on the top of the page. Echostar 00:52, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

After you post them separately, I think it's good! Just check to see if you can't add anything else. 17:53, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I agree. If possible, use a lot of describing words and such to make the article bigger, if you can. 21:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so I separated both articles but I was thinking hard and basically, there are no more words to use for either of these articles. 23:44, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then, looks good! 18:47, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! If there are no objections, then is on the To-Be-CBVed list. 03:47, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Morningkit - Silver Nomination
Like above, expanded to the maximum and looks good. 23:44, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, then! Looks nice! 23:47, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

This will be CBVed after more votes close. 18:52, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  14:12, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Dewkit ~ Silver Nomination
I added a quote. Comments?

That was me. Forgot my siggie. 07:06, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think she's ready! She wasn't seen very much in Night Whispers, but her article is well written. The first paragraph seemed kind of short, so I expanded it a little. 15:18, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Are you sure there's no more narrator quotes or anything like that? 17:51, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yea because that's pretty much all she says in the whold book so....yea. And thanks, Ivyheart for expanding the history! 71.135.168.24 09:02, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

What happened to my siggie?oh, there.

Looks good then! 22:13, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! Great job! 18:17, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Where any of them (Dewkit, Mistkit, Sparrowkit) seen in Sign of the Moon? I don't think they were, so I guess you should add that, unless they were seen. 23:27, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, they weren't, but I don't think they died, either. I'll add it then. 23:36, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think Sparrowkit in the main quote is supposed to be linked to his page, but I'm not sure. Otherwise, this article looks superb to me. :) 00:50, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. 22:36, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! On the CBV list then. 20:19, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mistkit (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
I saw that Dewkit was nominated, so I checked out Mistkit and expaned her article, and I thought it was good enough. Now we just need a main quote, but I'm not sure how to add it in. Comments? 20:14, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think it can be expanded some more. For the main quote see this: Template:Main Quote, and you should be able to add it in. 20:24, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I added in a main quote, it was the only thing she said, but I guess it's ok. As for the history, I will try to expand it more, if possible. She didn't appear very much. 21:26, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Expanded the history as much as I could. 21:46, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

History looks much better now! Nice job! =) Are you sure there aren't any narrator quotes that you could use? 22:26, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! I don't think there are any good narrator ones, as far as I've looked. 23:32, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, looks good then! 23:39, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Does anyone think there are more things I should check out? 18:03, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nope! It looks good. 01:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think there was a good narrator quote, but I guess I'm wrong. Looks great! 18:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

So it's almost ready, I guess? 17:44, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it will probably be on the CBV list. 17:46, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

It is. 03:45, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Where is the CBV list? xD 19:13, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's a mental list. :) 17:28, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Allrighty then xD 15:34, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower ~ Silver Nomination
I'm still looking for quotes that describe her personality and checking for grammar mistakes. Besides those, comments? -- 06:52, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

These quotes looks good! I'm pretty sure I fixed all the grammar mistakes, so you don't have to worry about that. 16:35, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to add more detail to the last paragraph, as in does she say anything, do anything, etc.? 16:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Could you expand the last paragraph of Crookedstar's Promise? 16:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sure! I'll go check the book right now and do the things above later if possible. 07:40, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the last paragraph. How does it look now? 07:56, July 19, 2011 (UTC)L

Looks great! 18:43, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Good work! This can be cBVed once more votes close. 23:58, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Daisyheart - Silver Nomination
She looks fine. 12:28, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you try to find more quotes? If you can't, then that's okay. Looks great! 13:12, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Someone's already doing this article farther up on the page. Sorry, but you'll have to choose another one. :P 16:37, July 18, 2011 (UTC)Y

I already nominated it...so this will be archived. You can check by using Ctrl-F to see if the nomination is already up. And, she already has all her quotes. xD 18:24, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Why do I always take your votes, Mistystar? xD Yeah, sorry about that xD 23:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) - Silver Nomination
Woo. He looks good, his history is expanded and he has references. 23:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does he have any quotes? From the narrator or anything? 02:19, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Just realized...you already have 4 nominations up. Sorry, but the guidelines say that you can only have 3 nominations up at a time, so this will be archived. After the votes close for you other ones, you can start this again... 18:57, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (TC) ~ Silver Nomination
I'm expanding it now and trying to find quotes. 19:04, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I thought you said that you didn't nominate minor characters. Find the quote mentioned in the second paragraph of the history. 19:32, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't, but my new goal is to nominate them all in alphabetical order, so I just happened to find a minor character that isn't silver already. 19:53, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

There, I expanded it to it's extent. Please don't say expand it more, as I already did, and it can't be expanded further. I also found quotes. Anything else? 21:16, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

It seems fine to me. 23:44, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! Good job. 02:27, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, this will be on the CBV list. 20:20, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sparrowkit - Silver Nomination
I'm adding another quote in right now. So, comments? :3 23:22, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Add another quote, and add in the quote descriptions, and it should be ready! 23:48, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Can it be expanded some more? 23:57, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

The three littermates are being nominated at the same time! xD The article looks great, though I think the history could be expanded, if you look through the chapters they are in, in Night Whispers. That's how I expanded Mistkit's article. 17:46, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded his history and gave the quotes descriptions, but there isn't really anymore quotes that describe him well. If he reallly needs another quote, though, I'll add one. 19:13, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

His article is looking great! :) 19:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed! 19:43, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think another quote would be nice since the article is so short anyway. 23:50, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

After another quote, it'll probably look good. 19:31, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mkay, I'll add one. 19:44, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Added. 15:43, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Looks great! 16:48, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Beechpaw (SC) ~ Silver Nomination
I hate nominating characters that appear so briefly that there's hardly anything about them. Oh well. Hopefully this gets approved fast so I can do a better one. Comments? 19:43, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any quotes from the narrator that can be added? 19:41, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

No, there's literally only one sentence that mentions him in the book at all. 23:33, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

If there's absolutely no other quotes you can have for him/her, then I don't see what else you can do. -- 04:43, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ditto. 22:45, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

One more for the CBV list! :P 20:21, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstar (RC) ~ Silver Nomination
I believe that her article is looking good! I think she has some good quotes at the bottom, and a great main quote. I expanded her history a lot, too. So, Comments? 19:35, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any longer quotes that she says or the narrator says? Also, you might just want to proofread to catch any mistakes. Looks great! 19:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I just read the book, and there's some other longer quotes that can be added. And I got a lot of grammar mistakes, but I'm not sure if that's all. 23:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry about the quotes; I added a lot in. 23:49, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Good, thanks! I'm gonna go check right now if I can expand it or anything else. 23:54, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Could you cut up the first paragraph of Code of the Clans to different ones? It looks too...big. 20:05, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. ☀  S q  u  i  r  r  e  l  F  l  a  m  e  2  9 ☀   Finally   Cooling   it   Down  21:16, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Milkfur (RC) - Silver Nomination
There isn't much information about Milkfur, so what else could I do to the article? 03:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any quote(s) such as from the narrator that can be used as a main quote? 04:13, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, that's the ONLY quote I could find for him. 04:23, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Where does it say he is a tom? As I recall, the book never said if Milkfur was a tom or she-cat. Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  14:17, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I just checked, and you might want to get a reference for that. 23:53, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I removed the gender thing, so now he/she is upspecified, I just forgot to say that 22:03, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, looks good! 18:41, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBV list for this one too. 20:22, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw ~ Silver Nomination
His page looks good. I'm still expanding Firestar's Quest and looking for some quotes and grammar mistakes. And how do I remove a category? Someone added in The Rescue categroy for Sharpclaw by mistake but I don't know how to remove it. 06:26, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Just The Rescue, not The Rescue characters? 14:06, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. It's on The Rescue. The Rescue characters can stay, but The Rescue category needs to go away. xD 14:11, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't have The Rescue, so I don't know if it's possible, but could you expand that last paragraph? Mintstar  I may be bad, but I'm good at it!  14:18, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. I'll try to expand it. 14:25, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok, I got rid of it for you. And could you find some more quotes? I'm sure there's better ones in SkyClan's Destiny. 23:50, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't have SkyClan's Destiny right now, but I have The Rescue, and there's one quote I'm going to add in right now. 01:56, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Note: I'm still working on this.....Just thought you guys should know. xD 14:43, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to expand Firestar's Quest a tad more? 20:03, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Does anyone want to take over this? I don't feel like working on this anymore. I don't have Firestar's Quest and SkyClan's Destiny right now, and I can only expand The Rescue. Basically, I can't help improve this page without Firestar's Quest and SkyClan's Destiny. 05:20, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose ~ Silver Nomination
I'm expanding it right now, and I'm not going to stop until it's silver! :) 18:12, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, I forgot that I already had three nominations up. This is now temporarily closed, and I'd appreciate it if no one took it from me! =) 20:02, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgestar - Silver Nomination
Looks ready. :3 16:08, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can it be expanded anymore? I understand if you can't. 18:08, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so, I believe he only appears onone page. 20:52, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

If there aren't any narrator quotes, it looks good! 19:30, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

I just checked through her article, and it seems pretty good for a very minor character. Ivyheart 15:50, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Rainsplash - Silver Nomination
Yeah, looks ready..too. xD 16:08, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Quotes? I think there's only one though. See if you can find more. Like Sedgestar, can it be expanded? 18:09, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, quotes could be added as there are an inaquedate number right now. Can you find any narrator quotes? 19:29, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really know, I checked the book again and he says one thing. I can't find a narrator quote, but I'm not the best searcher. xD 15:47, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, you can add that quote in as a main quote, and no one will bother you about quotes anymore. XD 18:40, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! 16:47, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

To-be-CBVed then? 20:24, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed your qoute, you forgot qoutation marks :) 01:01, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Diesel ~ Silver Nomination
I know this needs a lot of work, so this is like a reservation. 21:51, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I have the book. I'll see about expanding it. 22:19, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

There! I expanded it and added quotes. Better, Mistystar? 02:57, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Squirrelflame! Comments? 02:56, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think Warrior's Return in the bottom two quotes should be linked to their articles. 00:57, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's done now. :P 18:45, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful job! 20:02, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Squirrelflame! 20:25, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Willowkit (CP) - Silver Nomination
I added some quotes and I think she's ready, so comments? 16:04, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure the article can be expanded. 18:36, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

"Willowkit, along with Minnowkit and Willowbreeze, lose their lives to greencough." I think that this could be written two ways, either as "Willowkit, Minnowkit, and Willowbreeze lose their lives to greencough" or "Willowkit, along with Minnowkit and Willowbreeze, loses her life to greencough." It's correct grammar to me. ;) Also, I believe there is no need to put in before the reference in the bottom quote because no other quotes I've seen are quite in that format. When it says the book title and the page number above the caption of the quote in superscript, I think it's just a source, not actually part of the caption. It looks very nice, though. :) 00:56, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think the best way to write that is: "Willowkit and her sisters, Minnowkit and Willowbreeze, lose their lives to greencough." And the quote must have page number for reference becuase that's the way the template is and quotes are. 23:14, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

I like the way you rewrote the sentence, SquirrelFlame. :) And as a reply to your second statement, I think you misunderstood me. I meant that it was weird to put the word "in" before the source because most quotes I've seen aren't put in that format. Let me show you. Here's what the quote in the article looks like currently (I've bolded the word "in"):

It looks pretty unusual to me when the caption is written as if the caption itself and the source are connected. So my point is that I think Rainwhisper should fix this. But that's just my opinion. ;) 23:26, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind. I just fixed it myself and I hope Rainwhisper doesn't mind. :) Just wanted to explain to clear things up. 23:31, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, you're right, silly me. :P Yeah, it shouldn't have been like that. Thanks for clearing up the misunderstanding! ☀  S q  u  i  r  r  e  l  F  l  a  m  e  2  9 ☀   Finally   Cooling   it   Down  19:09, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh thanks, Rainshine. ^^' I'll get to expanding it now. :3 20:34, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I expanded it. ;3 20:41, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job with the expanding! Looks better! ☀  S q  u  i  r  r  e  l  F  l  a  m  e  2  9 ☀   Finally   Cooling   it   Down  22:45, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Is it possible to flesh out the Warriors App section a bit? 19:59, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yellowfang ~ Silver Nomination
I filled in The Power of Three section as much as I could. I will add in any new ideas. Thanks! 22:58, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a dialogue quote? It would be nice... Other than that, expand Fire and Ice, Forest of Secrets, The Darkest Hour, Starlight, Sign of the Moon, and Secrets of the Clans. Sorry, I know that's a lot. ;) Also go through and change everything to present tense. Fix any grammar issues too. 23:19, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

yeah what Squirrelflame said and should the yellowfang's secret heading be up so early? Oh no! emergency!  C a n y o n <font color="#8A8A8A">s <font color="#A1A1A1">o <font color="#B0B0B0">n <font color="#C2C2C2">g   <span style="color:#FFFFFF;background:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#000000;border:1px solid;-moz-border-raiuds:1em;color:#CC1100;">Candypaw to the rescue!   23:25, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but Yellowfang already is Silver. 00:28, July 30, 2011 (UTC)

Velvet ~ Silver Nomination
I added quotes, and expanded the article, comments? 16:41, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Article looks great! I'm really sure it can't be expanded, but just check to make sure. ;) For some weird reason, the references for the quotes are kind of weird... I'll fix it. Also, the last sentence in the main quote:I gave you are daughter, remember? seems kind of odd. Can you check that sentence in the book, please? 19:14, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

LOL, SquirrelFlame, you're right. ;) My best guess is that "are" was meant to be "our." But I'm not sure, so I'm not going to fix it. Atelda, this looks great! Only in the main quote's caption, I don't think there should be a period after "Red" or the word "in" before SkyClan's Destiny. None of the other quotes are quite like that. I also think you should get rid of the period after the word "do" in the second quote down in the quotes section. Also, in the last sentence of the last paragraph of her SkyClan's destiny section, I think "their" should be "they're." Everything else looks fantastic to me. :) 21:21, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wow, today must be off. Anyways, I checked through the book and she's not mentioned again. And quotes and silly spelling errors on my part have been fixed. 22:06, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I got a few grammar mistakes here and there and it looks good to me. 22:40, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Same here. 18:57, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Three Quote Limit
Were we ever following that rule? 22:40, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nahhh. I don't think so. ;) I mean, what about the cats that are so minor that they don't even hit three, or the cats that are so major that it's hard to pick the best ones? And even if we were capable of the aforementioned, what would be the point? Unless having three quotes makes articles appear seemingly organized. At least, that's what I think. 23:53, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, it was never really enforced. I think everyone know the right amount for an article without going overboard. And someone could always say, "there are too many quotes, I think you should delete..." 00:16, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. 00:54, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Has the limit been taken off the rules? 19:30, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Robinstar - Silver Nomination
<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">I expanded the article and changed his description. :) Comments? 00:07, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Looks good! I would strongly suggest to change the style a bit as it messes with the flow of the article. Is there any quotes too, like from the narrator? 00:25, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">What exactly do you mean by "the style," Atelda, could you be more specific, please? :) And although Robinstar doesn't say anything himself, I'll check to make sure if Leafpool (the narrator) says anything fitting. 00:28, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Style is basically how the article is written whether it be from run-on sentences or just some out of place words. It's easy to fix. ;) 00:53, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Since we dont know the gender of the cat, I changed one he to a s/he for you. 15:45, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Thanks Ivystripe! :) And I'll get right on it, Atelda. 16:28, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Alright, I fixed the style and added a quote. But if the quote seems out of place or if anyone thinks it should be the main quote, suggest away. ;) 18:31, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="border-top-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; border-style: initial; border-color: initial; font-style: inherit; font-weight: inherit; margin-top: 0.4em; margin-right: 0px; margin-bottom: 0.5em; margin-left: 0px; padding-top: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">I think it should be a main quote since there isn't any other one. 18:55, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

Avoiding Phrases
In the FAQ it says to avoid some phrases. I ask what if a character is seen only every now and then such as Rosetail in Bluestar's Prophecy. It is hard not to use later in the book... or she is seen only when... Anyone know some words to put into the texts instead of those? 19:38, August 4, 2011 (UTC)

You don't need to use anything. It works fine without anything. 15:41, August 4, 2011 (UTC)