Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 62

Briarlight (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Rainface, and I tweaked it. Redid the shading.

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Stick (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for raggedness and...scrapiness....xD 02:53, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

If it said he has a scarped pelt, shouldn't he have more patches of skin? (same goes for the warrior o3o) 03:38, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sure, why not 05:03, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

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Brambleberry (MC) ~ Redone
OA is Echomist, with a tweak by Ivy. Redone for multiple reasons. (meh I don't like this, I think I might redo it)

Expand the shading on the back of the shoulders a bit. 05:34, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing image and giving her to Ivy.

Reuploaded Alrighty...how's this? I incorprated parts of Cloudy's design and made a furry effect. I love this :D 06:37, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her a lot, she's still very gray. 08:36, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can only lighten the shading so much before she looks flat, so is this better? =) 18:50, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

If you're redoing it and want a bit of realism, I'd add in a few stripes since spotted cats always have stripes. But that's just me, no need to take my advice. I'd say add a second layer of shading to give it more depth. 19:05, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

She's still pretty grey. Maybe try expanding the highlights? 22:07, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shelly, I would, but Rain's to-be tweak nomination to have stripes because she was flecked was declined, so I don't know if everyone would be ok with her having tabby points. 19:28, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather her not have the tabby points. In the only official artwork we have for her, she's shown /without them/, and from what I remember, they're totally optional here. Now, onto the image itself. This is beautiful... but can you define where the ear pink is? It's kinda hard to tell.

Reuploaded 19:46, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if you meant to, or if it's my screen or what, but the highlights look tinted yellow Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 23:53, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

It's not a problem if they are (though I don't see it). Shading and highlights are tinted on images all the time. Anyways, sorry ivy but this still looks gray. I wouldn't be making such a fuss about it, but considering that was one of the main reasons it was nominated, it really needs to be fixed. 20:37, November 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Personally, I think it looks flat now, but what do you guys think? 23:25, November 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks kinda flat. Try adding another layer of shading so that it is more defined in the darker places. 03:00, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

It's wasn't that you had to lighten the shading, it was that you had to make it not gray. There is a difference. A good way to make it still white with darker shading is to have it not so blurred, or make the shading a bit... thinner.... not sure how to describe it, but put less of it, then blur it like normal. Just so thin layers of shading don't cover everything. 20:26, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? :3 02:22, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights looks a little orange. Maybe blur it? Crys tal  hea  rt! ❄  05:10, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

They're not orange on my screen. o.o

They look more yellow on my screen. 05:15, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine if they're yellow/orange. Sunlight is. 05:44, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours since last upload.