Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 201

RiverClan Minor Tabby Apprentice ~ Approved
Much, much more confident about this Malina457 (talk) 06:03, January 20, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Define the tail and facial shading just a bit? I like the stripes! 06:27, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add more stripes along the shoulder and back haunch? —​​​​​

I feel the amount of stripes is fine, and Flametail's alt has even less than this does. ​​​​​

Blur the stripes and lighter parts a teensy bit more.

14:45, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

Add some depth to the eyes unless the gray is intentionalPotato&#61;) (talk) 16:53, January 20, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes aren't gray? Malina457 (talk) 17:00, January 20, 2019 (UTC)malina

They don't look gray on my screen. I believe they're yellowish, which look perfectly fine to me. ​​​

There was a slight bit of white waste in the <-- eye so I fixed it. reups Malina457 (talk) 17:20, January 20, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups again I changed the shading tint, red wasnt having it Malina457 (talk) 17:28, January 20, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Not sure if it's just me, but I feel like the stripes, especially on the legs/haunch, look like triangle stripes, which have been tweaked out in the past. Can you possibly elongate them and give more variation?

Im not even sure what that means? Malina457 (talk) 13:17, January 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

Triangle stripes are stripes with wider bases and smaller ends with little variation and often straight lines. I can kinda see where Fox is talking about with the lower three stripes on the haunch. Try ticking their edges/making them jagged, not making them super straight, or even adding a slight curve like the first neck stripe. Small alternations should do the trick. ^^ 16:39, January 21, 2019 (UTC)

reups Malina457 (talk) 01:22, January 22, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Hm. The three stripes at the top of the haunch still appear as triangle ones, can you alter those?

reups better? Malina457 (talk) 20:45, January 22, 2019 (UTC)malina

Hm. The issue is that they start wider and get thinner by point, so they're still the same shape as before^^ Could you rearrange them, so they aren't a triangle's overall shape still?

Should I connect them? Malina457 (talk) 01:16, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

That could possibly help! 02:30, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

reups hows that Malina457 (talk) 02:42, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups for waste Malina457 (talk) 13:14, January 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

CBA? I love the colors on this! 13:53, January 23, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 13:59, January 24, 2019 (UTC)