Warriors Wiki talk:Characters

Falcon Swoop - Silver Nomination
Comments? 15:31, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

See the part that's in parenthesis? Could you either remove those and make it flow with the article, or just get rid of the statement altogether? Also, could you extend Sign of the Moon at all? 15:34, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are there any quotes that could be used? 22:48, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Its been a week. Are you still working on this? 23:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

If she isn't, may I take over? 22:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

We'll give her 2 weeks in all, so if she doesn't comment by the end of this week, feel free to take over. 22:59, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I added two quotes. For some reason, I can't find where she's mentioned in SotM. 16:43, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! In the SOTM section, though, the second sentence of the paragraph doesn't really make sense because it never explicitly states what Furled Bracken announces in his speech. Perhaps you could add a little to that, to clear things up a bit? But otherwise this is a job well done, in my opinion. :) 04:47, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

We're not supposed to use direct quotes, and as I already said (if you bothered to read my last comment) that I cannot find in SotM where she is mentioned by name. So, if someone can give me a page number or two, I could elaborate on that section a little better. 00:06, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make her overall history a little more detailed. 18:57, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Frogleap ~ Silver Nomination
Okay, so any comments for me to do on Frogleap? I just started so please don't get mad at me. Dew st  ar  Don't judge me!   21:26, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

We don't nominate for Bronze rank here. You can upgrade it to Bronze when you feel it's good enough, then nominate it for silver when the article looks well thought out and has all the information you can fit in it. 21:35, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Argh, edit conflicts. ;) So, is Dewstar allowed to nominate this? I always thought you could just nominate for silver even if they were below bronze. 21:36, November 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I wouldn't know. I would think so, since Bronze is a rank that anyone can give a character. 21:38, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Dewstar can nominate this for silver, but not for bronze. You can give any character the status of being bronze. Dewstar, I suggest you look at the FAQ if you have any questions or look at guidelines Moonflight is drafting. 22:47, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

This will be archived due to comment above. 23:02, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys i was tired  Dew  st  ar  PEACE   00:29, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ok then, Crookedstar's Promise needs major expansion/detailing and more quotes should be found. :3 00:31, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Man Sweetflower, I need to borrow that book again. I'm just kidding. I could probably find something. tear tear  Dew  st  ar  PEACE   00:36, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded the "Crookedstar's promise" history please check it out and tell me if I need to change anything? Dew st  ar  PEACE   01:47, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed some of it. 02:00 Wed Nov 30

Ok Sweetflower. :3

Anything else you want me to do like add the Quotes? -- 02:29, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Quotes please. 22:09 Wed Nov 30

I already added three. -- 22:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you find a better quote than: "It can't be!"? It doesn't quite describe his personality much. 00:16 Fri Dec 2

Already did that. :3 Ok um Atelda, do you have anything to say about Frogleap like expand history or what? Sweetflower anything else? -- 12:57, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Dewstar, please don't comment like that again. But you can expand CP more. I think he is mentoined more than that. 23:15 Mon Dec 5

He is. Somewhere near the end. Do you have the book? 23:26, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Im only using Google books guys please take it easy on me? 00:34, December 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's the same thing as using a real book, but it's better. And what do you mean go "easy on me?" It's your job to expand what we tell you to do. That's what you nominated him for. To make his article better. ;) 13:19 Sat Dec 10

Are you still working on this Dew? 01:10 Mon Dec 12

No comments for 10 days anyone can take over. 23:39, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over. 23:41, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded it more. Anything else i need to expand like more of Crookedstar's Promise? -- 18:19, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

In the next-to-last paragraph, it says that Frogleap rushed forward into battle, but he was stopped by Hailstar. Could you specify which battle? 23:30, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Frecklewish ~ Silver Nomination
Frecklewish

Any comments??

Is there any mention of her in Beyond the Code? Can you also find any quotes that truly represent her personality as the three in the quote section are just narrating a scene? 23:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ill try Atelda. :3 I like her name. 00:34, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Sweetflower. ^_^ -- 22:17, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Find a reference for the description. 00:52, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Expand "SkyClan's Destiny" a bit more please. 01:14 Fri Dec 2

Ok, so anyways I just expanded "Skyclans Destiny" Sweetflower, and reference so like description in one of the books 23:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but expand it a bit more Dewstar. A reference to the description, you know what her description is? The part where she's called "leggy". 23:10 Mon Dec 5

I found the site, and I'll add it in ;) 22:13 Wed Dec 7

Fixed the Nomination title. 23:17 Thu Dec 8

Are you still working on this Dewstar? 00:18 Tue Dec 13

I fixed a paragraph ("Sharpclaw is asked a little bit later if she could check the elders bedding. Ebonyclaw growled All by herself thats unfair. Mintpaw and Sagepaw are on patrol. Frecklepaw pipped in I dont mind. "), since it seemed like too small a thing to bother you with when it would only take a second to fix myself. I hope you don't mind. :) 16:26, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks Hollydapple798 :) and yes i am still working on her 18:20, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Would she get a section for the SkyClan magnas'? F i r e s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  23:14, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but only if she's seen in them I think. <span style="">23:35 Wed Dec 21

I believe she was only mentioned. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  23:39, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Could you find a quote that shows her personality more? The current one doesn't really tell me anything about her personality, except wanting to become a medicine cat, and personality is different than wanting something. I am sure there are better quotes for the main quote. :) 19:00, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur ~ Withdrawn
Comments? 23:37, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar's Quest", "The Darkest Hour", "The Sight", "Outcast", "Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon need to be expanded. 23:45, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Don't forget The Forgotten Warrior either. :3 23:46, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

It might take a little while, and I can't do too much about TFW because I'm still reading it. Dx 23:50, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I did my best which is fail Dx doing my best though :P 00:10, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

If you need any help just give me a shout. <span style="">00:17 Tue Dec 6 Please? I'm having some troubles... 01:56, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure what do you need help with? <span style="">00:05 Wed Dec 7 Well, almost everything but I will still be doing my best. 23:01, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, any book you need help expanding? <span style="">23:28 Thu Dec 8

Everything. ;-; 04:02, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded Firestar's Quest. <span style="">00:01 Mon Dec 12

I'm sorry, but I'm opposed to Sweetflower helping you out with everything. This is your nomination, Sandstorm. You should be able to expand this article mostly by yourself. I understand if someone doesn't have this certain book or what not, but every single book seems way too extreme. I "suggest withdrawing" this nomination and start with a more minor character. 00:04, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

You could use google books, or something like it. Other than that, I suggest withdrawing it like Atelda said, there are plenty of "minor" character articles you could work on, before you get into more important characters. If you look at my userpage where my PC votes are, you'll see the majority of nominations are minor characters. :3 'Casue they're easy. But once you get comfortable with stuff, then I'd start trying more important characters. Just a suggestion though! <span style="">01:07 Mon Dec 12

Is this still being worked on? 16:04, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

It's been almost a week without a comment, is it possible for me to take over? <span style="">00:04, Sun, Dec, 18, 2011

I think they get two weeks to work on a nomination here, don't they? At least, that's what happened with Falcon Swoop. 00:08, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Sandstorm, gets two weeks. ;) <span style="">15:30 Sun Dec 18

Derp. Actually, I think it was 3 weeks ;). I must have got confused with PCA. <span style="">05:18, Mon, Dec, 19, 2011

Actually, I say it's 5-7 days. Nominations should only be up for three weeks, but that's not a rule I've particularly enforced due to the thirty active nominations we had in recent months. So feel free to take over. 16:39, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get working on it ASAP. <span style="">05:45, Tue, Dec, 20, 2011

This might take a while, I expanded some of TDH. <span style="">23:54, Thu, Dec, 22, 2011

Sorry but I'm withdrawing this. With things going on on the other projects, my real life business, i'm a bit stressed out. I think I'm not ready for a major character just yet. <span style="">00:10, Sat, Dec, 24, 2011

Molepaw (OTS) ~ Silver nomination
I know,it needs improvements, but I am willing to nominate him for silver status. Comments? 04:13, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Expand NIght Whispers. <span style="">01:30 Thu Dec 8

In the Forgotten Warrior, can you possibly add in when Jayfeather goes into Molepaw's mind and sees the fox moment, and describe the moment? 04:49, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also add in a better main quote, and add some to the bottom? 04:50, December 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? <span style="">00:10 Wed Dec 14

Yep, starting now. -- 01:30, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

In The Forgotten Warrior, it isn't explained why Molepaw gave in and let Firestar apprentice him to Rosepetal, it just says that it does. Could you add that in, please? 22:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I added that. I'll work on the quotes now. 00:17, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Russetfur ~ Silver Nomination
She always was one of my favourites. Comments? <span style="">23:13 Sat Dec 10

This article needs a profuse amount of work and I'm inclined to think it as a reservation. Basically all of the history needs to be expanded and detailed, the main quote needs to be replaced as does the other quotes. Also looking at some of the sections, the writing is extremely choppy. 23:19, December 10, 2011 (UTC)

(This is just for reference) I expanded Fire and Ice, Moonrise, Dawn, The Fourth Apprentice, and Sunset. (All the ones that I list are expanded to the max. <span style="">01:57 Sun Dec 11


 * Fire and Ice
 * Moonrise
 * Dawn
 * Starlight
 * Sunset
 * The Fourth Apprentice
 * The Sight

Done expanding and detailing. If there is a certain section you think still needs work, just tell me. I'm going ot get more quotes now. <span style="">20:53 Sun Dec 11

Fading Echoes could be expanded at the end of the last paragraph I believe. Anyways, nice work Sweet! 23:45, December 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll work on that now. <span style="">23:51 Sun Dec 11

Done. <span style="">00:10 Mon Dec 12

Could you rephrase the Firestar's Quest section? And in the Into the Wild section, could you say Clawface snatched the kits instead of Brokenstar? 03:06, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Done. <span style="">21:16 Thu Dec 15

I'd replace the quotes and find better ones that describe her personality. 23:37, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I'll try. <span style="">01:24 Wed Dec 21

I added a quote, I'll change some tomorrow. <span style="">23:56 Wed Dec 21

Done <span style="">23:29 Fri Dec 23

Cinderfur - Silver Nomination
Glad to be back. So, yes, first nomination. I'll be expanding his history pretty soon. Warning, I just loaned my copy of Fire and Ice out, and I probably won't get it back until Sunday, so I can't get the quote I want from it. -_-' Ah well, anyway...comments? 03:02, December 15, 2011 (UTC)

Expand RS and <S>TDH</S>. <span style="">21:22 Thu Dec 15

Expanded Rising Storm. 04:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Expand ADP. <span style="">01:17 Sun Dec 18

Can you elaborate on his part in Into the Wild a little more? Since he was part of the group that helped rescue the kits, check to see if he said anything/did anything of vague importance. It's been a while since I've read the first arc. 01:21, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Did my best with ADP, but he's only mentioned in one line. I also looked, but Cinderfur was never named in ITW, so I'm not sure if he was part of the attack. I tried to expand both as much as I could.... 23:30, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

I was wondering, does this need a quote or two? Just wondering, I'm not really used to what elicits a quote section on here. x3 16:29, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, this needs a few quotes. Make sure the quotes describe his personality though. 16:57, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Three quotes have been added. 20:45, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add a main quote. :P <span style="">22:50 Mon Dec 19

Done. I can't believe I forgot that. *headdesk* 00:15, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Could you possibly add another quote in the Quote section? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas & Hannukah to all!  03:18, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

I expanded one quote and added another in. There aren't any others I could use that I know of. 23:25, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Expand FOS.<span style="">02:44 Sat Dec 24

Expanded to the best of my ability. ;~; 03:27, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

The last quote, seems to descripe Nightstar more than him. 03:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw - Silver Nomination
All the article needs is a few quotes, so I'll add those later. x3 17:00, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Explain who Voleclaw's mother/siblings are at the beginning. Other than that it looks really good. 20:49, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

The main quote is the exact same quote as the bottom one. But it looks great aside from that. ;3 23:57, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mallownose ~ Silver Nomination
I expanded all history sections, and added in two quotes. Comments? 00:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Rephrase the second paragraph in Dark River. 00:17, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 23:45, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Plumwillow - Silver Nomination
I added three quotes, and I added Beyond the Code. This is my first nomination, so, I hope I'm doing this right. 20:43, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add descriptions for the first two quotes in her quote section. Your doing it right, don't worry. <span style="">20:49 Tue Dec 20

Done... 20:55, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Expand SkyClan's Destiny. 21:03, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Could you rephrase the "The Rescue" section please? 01:16, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Rephrased The Rescue. I'll expand SD soon. 21:33, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really find a way to expand it, so, I guess, if someone could help, that'd be great... o3o 00:03, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

You can detail it. <span style="">02:21 Sat Dec 24

Vixenkit ~ Silver Nomination
I've expanded as much as possible, since she's only mentioned in 2 sentences...comments? 02:01, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Any other quotes? <span style="">05:15, Wed, Dec, 21, 2011

There is pretty much nothing wrong with it, except can you make the part where Vxenkit is arguing with Silverkit? And that section could be expanded more by putting in how Silverkit had to sleep with them or putting in that part where Silverkit mentions that she is bigger than Vixenkit. 19:05, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Pricklekit (RC) ~ Silver Nomination
Well believe it or not, I clicked the random page button, and Pricklekit's page came up. I looked through it and it seemed like a good article to nominate. Suggestions? <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas &amp; Hannukah to all!  21:03, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Silly Rowan, you had to have put it on Bronze status first. 21:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind, I did that for you. o3o 21:34, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Gah! Silly me! Thanks, Twi :3 <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas &amp; Hannukah to all!  22:54, December 21, 20

I can't find anything wrong with it, but could a main quote be added? 19:02, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

I looked through Sunrise and only Petalkit was mentioned. I can't find anything on Pricklekit. <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6" style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">F <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">i <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">e <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">s <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">t <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">a <font color="Orange" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">r <font color="Red" face="Mistral" size="6"  style="background:transparent; border:1px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; orange;">! <font color=Green>Merry Christmas &amp; Hannukah to all!  20:10, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Is his/her name even mentione din a book? YOu can use a narrator quote. <span style="">02:27 Sat Dec 24

No I didn't see it, and I know xD 02:29, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could I Join?
May I please join in here?

Sure. Please take a look at the FAQ if you have any questions. Welcome to the project. 19:26, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! =3

Welcome to the project! <span style="">21:44 Fri Dec 23

Welcome! 23:26, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Gray Sky Before Dawn - Silver Nomination
Strangely drawn to this one. I expanded a lot of Outcast, and I'll work on Sign of the Moon soon too. I can already think of one or two quotes that describe his personality more. So, comments and suggestions? 23:59, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, I was gonna do him. :P Just add some quotes expand SOtM and he's good. <span style="">00:13 Sat Dec 24

Sorry, Sweetflower! x3 I changed the main quote because I didn't really like the one before (no offense to anybody who did), added more quotes, and expanded SoTM. 02:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok. And the main quote is good now. <span style="">02:49 Sat Dec 24