Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Yellowfang (E) - Tweaked
I just tweaked the muzzle....OA was Thistle (who had help from 'teldy.) Comments? 01:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The line should end at the edge of her mouth and should not extend below it. 01:49, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Like this? 20:58, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shorten the mouth to end at the crease like it does on the apprentice charart. 20:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Since Twi has left PCA, any user who so wishes may take over this project. 18:55, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'll try at it... 23:18, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:33, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look any different. 14:19, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... what should I do to fix it? 14:58, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Don't have the line go past the mouth line. 02:54 Tue Mar 27

Re-uploaded 22:23, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Thin and smooth out the line a bit. 15:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked


This is my first tweak, so just tell me if I'm doing something wrong.

So okayyy. I tweaked the shading and tried to make it more like her apprentice.

Comments? :3

15:35, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks almost like it is tinted brown... (sorry if its just my computer) Can you fix that? 15:46, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle you dork this is over the limit X3 16:01 Sat Mar 17

Yup, it is. xD Silly Thistle. Declined for now, you can repost when there's space. 18:52, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I archived something so you're good. 19:30 Sat Mar 17

The shading looks kind of green. When I did her apprentice, I tinted her shading slightly red, so that might help :) 23:16, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Upload it over the old file. 15:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded it over the old file, but it red tinged, and not a dork anymore. Phew. 18:25, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

In Cherrypaw's talk page, although it hasn't been put in due to lack of page numbers, I velieve ger eyes were revealed to be amber? Should the eyes be changed, or wait until a cite is in? Sky Exterminate! 01:53, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I say wait until a cite is added. If you don't mind...could you define the ear pink? 04:38, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

The light parts look tinted yellow-green. 08:33, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to define the stripes? They look very faded. Sky Exterminate! 10:02, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this thistle? 22:14, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but no. >:C I'm in Phoenix and can't work on it 'cause I don't have my tablet. Sorry. >> 16:03, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked the whiskers to be longer. I can't tweak the left whiskers because there is no more room on the image to. Comments? 22:51, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Just make the canvas bigger 23:24, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean? Aren't the whiskers at the last pixel on the image? 23:27, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

She means to increase the extra space you have. If you use GIMP or Pixlr, I believe you go to Image -> Canvas Size. 01:09, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks Leafstrike ^^ 17:50, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make them droop more. They look like sticks or something right now. 19:37, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Iceheart and the shading was blotchy. Comments? 17:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten it? I can't tell the difference between the lineart and the base color. 19:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'd personally prefer it stay this dark. Not being able to see all of the lineart isn't the end of the world. Shrewtooth is a black cat, not dark gray. 19:55, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps blur the shading's edges? Mainly the body shading. 06:27, 22, 03, 2012

Reuploaded 04:58, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights a little on the face. Breeze whisker  17:57, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the "highlights" on the tail? 20:28, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot to say it a while ago. 01:31, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Rabbittail (W) ~ Redone
Um....fail on the tail, ew. OA ish Nightfall101. Skt Dalek Caan 00:40, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploadeed. Didn't liek the shading, so I blurred it more. Skt Dalek Caan 00:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Looks much better, Trolly. 00:52, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Defined earpink is defined. Skt Dalek Caan 00:59, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpinjk more pinky. Lovelty 8D  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 12:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tied to make him look furry, but I'm no Mountain. Dx Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:40, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

(If you want) Blur the earpink around the edges. Awesome job! <3 07:57, 27, 03, 2012

I personally think it's okay, but if anyone disagrees, yell at me. C: Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  10:24, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

*yells at you* Jokes aside, I agree it should be smoothed a bit, as realistic earpink isn't perfectly triangular. 22:06, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwhisker (E) - Redone
OA was Ashshadow. I took over for Bloo since she left the Wiki. I played around with this a bit to make it more realistic, and upon searching for a real brown and white gray cat, I came upon a [http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_HC_iJORcmts/TGQ_yjc8BSI/AAAAAAAABNk/vYgmndHUBcc/s1600/dandeliontail.png ticked, modified tortie almost. ] The only thing I don't like about this is the patchy fur. Comments for improvement? 18:05, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and I almost forgot, there was overwhelming support for Bloo to redo this. If you really want to get technical, I can bring this to a vote on the tweak page, but do we honestly need to do that? Three people already said yes, I believe. 18:10, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the patches a little less purple and, in lieu of having an outline, just smudge them lin the same pattern? 18:35, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 19:08, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Could you also put more shades of grey or brown in it? That would make it look more realistic. Breeze whisker  17:52, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add 2-3 more patches? :3 08:17, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  16:50, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Stick (Cat) (W) - Redone
Original artist was Goldenpaw, and the shading needed to be redone. Comments? 18:09, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you defin the tail and haunch shading a tad? Nicely done as always :) 18:11, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the ear and erase the two single pixels that point out. (If you know what I mean). 00:12, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, too~ Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 04:42, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 04:55, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 07:04, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred as much as I could. 17:13, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink/Make it stand out more. Great work! 07:51, 27, 03, 2012

Honeyfern (A) - Redone
OAs were *Ivypool*, Icethroat, and Mountain. She needed to match her redone look, and I'm tired of it sitting around and not matching :P I guess I'm the only one brave enough to try to match Mountain's awesomeness? Anyway, comments for improvement? 18:38, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading/light source on the face. :3 00:14, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink some. 01:20, 24, 03, 2012

I didn't make the warrior, Stoney did XD Define her dapples a little more. Lovely Ivy <33 06:47 Sat Mar 24

Define the tail shading~ (If it's there xP) Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  14:07, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry Stoney  16:55, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Flametail (A) - Redone
Hooray, space! Bleh, I'm not quite happy with this one, but..... Meh. OA was Snowfeather1 with a tweak by Cloudy then a redo by Scarlet. He was a triangle tabby. Comments? 00:05, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Umm I think you forgot the earpink...if you didn't then make it more visible. 00:49, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't forget it. It's nearly impossible to get the earpink right on these darn gingers without it looking neon. I personally think it's fine, but if others agree, I'll attempt to change it. 05:43, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 11:56, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Um he's just a ginger tom... but for the earpink maybe fill in the one closest to us a little more. 14:54, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the pale belly a bit. 15:49, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Ok I'll do all those things, but Wildfire, what do you mean by "He's just a ginger tom" how is this not a ginger tom? And also, we've decided that he's bright dark ginger too. 19:30, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think Wild might be referring to the fact he's got a pale belly... But, I do believe that's artist's choice, if memory serves. 13:57, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, something like that. But blur the belly a bit. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian  09:44, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changes aren't showing. Did everything said. And yes, pale belly's artist's choice. 08:03, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Palefoot (W) - Redone
OA was Rainbreath with a redo by me. Redone mostly because I didn't like to stripes. Classic tabby fail. 15:29, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink and (maybe) blur the stripes? 08:20, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Mitzi (KP) - Redone
Original artist was Hawktalon. Redone because unrealistic stripes and in my opnion didn't look like a tortoiseshell. Comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 13:55, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Where's the ear pink? If it's there, define it please. 13:59, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Hold up, Elo, the whole tortie description has been thrown into question. This might have to be changed. 21:33, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Should I change it now? or what? x.x.  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 00:22, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' on chat last night we established her real description, a two-toned gray and white cat. comments? C: -- Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 20:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudges ever so slightly so she doesn't look prickly. Very pretty! 22:04, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Wonderful job, Elo~ 01:17, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (D) - Redone
Its isn't something extra...needed to match elder...OA is Bracken-. ,19:54,March 26,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 19:02, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded ,18:59,March 27,2012

Define/sharpen the highlights c: 03:15, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  11:14, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Willowshine (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to look like the MCA image. Man, this was a difficult pattern to transfer onto a kit. DX 01:27, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. :3 But shouldn't the nose be black? Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 02:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

No, not all dark gray cats have black noses. 02:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * derp* XP Blur the earpink then? C: Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 07:58, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  19:44, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more >3< 00:48, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing a tthe moment, dear. 01:00, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Princess (KP) ~ Redone
They said I could be anything. So I became a pointed tabby. Haha, anyway, this is how I've always imagined Princess, actually. Comments? 02:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a tad? 02:24, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

FINALLY A POINTED TABBY! *celebrates* Add some shading to her back paw. 03:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And color in the tag. XD 07:21, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It was colored in, but I've defined it witha different shade. 00:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing (W) ~ Tweaked
I dunno what certain people have against white cats, but I find them fun to work with. OA was Mistystar, and I re-did the ear pink, added another layer of shading and played with the eyes (cause when I went to move the lineart up a layer, I accidentally cleared out the eyes...xD) 03:21, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Mistkit (SC) (Ki) - Redone
....... I burned it. owo 'Tis Chubacca's supposed daughter. This is what happens when you tell me to make a floofy character at 3am. XD Anyways, shading and fur needed to be redone. No clue who the OA was since Loonie renamed the image. Yes I'm gonna crop it, yes I know it's tinted blue, no I'm not gonna change that. Other comments? 21:14, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, that might be a bit much... tone it down a bit, eh? 21:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Kinkfur's just as bad.... it's just cause this is a smaller blank. I'd really rather not, but if others agree I will. 21:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but I agree with Shelly. It's too much and almost overwhelming to look at 22:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

OA was me. She does kinda look like a silver pinecone xP Maybe add some fuzz between her ears? Kinky has it. 22:08, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should keep her that fluffy. And I quote: "The kit's pale grey pelt was as spiky as a pinecone." 23:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just crop the image O_o 23:03, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno about toning it down...but blur the earpink? Lucky she's not an apprentice, lol <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:40, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I think the floof should stay, personally. It looks great. 8D Can you define/darken the shading a smidge? 23:46, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki) - Tweaked
Original artist was me, just needed to be lightened. Comments? 21:48, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Redone
OA's were Cloudskye, Elorisa. Needed to be redone to match the kit ~. Comments? :3 22:26, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that ear pink. 22:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Try to match the stripes on the apprentice more closely. They need to be darker, more textured, and they need to conform to the shape of his body. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

His main coloring needs to be a bit darker to match as well. Also, try to match the ear pink on the other images and don't have it so low that it leaks into his forehead. 22:43, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Uh Shelly, the apprentice is being redone to match the kit. 01:31 Thu Mar 29

Blackclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and I redid the horrid shading. . . and the ear pink, I think. XD Changes might not be showing. But, you'll know the difference if they are. 22:46, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ~ :3 23:06, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Are you sure you're looking at the right file? I've gotten the shading pretty much blurred to the max... 23:07, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sure. :3 23:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

lol, okay, sure. xD

Re-uploaded. 23:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Tweaked
...I don't have much to say about this one. OA was Echomist, and the highlights needed to be blurred and toned down. File changes aren't showing yet, I assume. 23:32, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Nice :3 Blur the highlights. 23:34, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

...File changes aren't showing yet. This is the old version. =3 23:36, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Oh..I'm sorry Dx. 23:38, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Leafpool (MCA) ~ Tweaked
She just needed her belly extended. I think you can guess who the OA is... ;) 00:12, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Err... Darkhallows? Blur the belly shading. 01:29, March 29, 2012 (UTC)