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Clawface (Ro) ~ For Approval
I found a spot! Yay, first charart up in a while. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 23:03, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Are there scars? I can't quite tell. If not, add them. 8D 23:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Is there a light part along his back? If so, make it brighterr Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Take the earpink from his warrior (if you did, take it directly from the center). If you did that...then just disregard this x3 05:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   May the odds be ever in your favor 11:14, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Could be my computer (I'll try looking at this from a different one later) but could you make the earpink a little more pink? Blur where the back highlight meets thhe shading to smooth it out. Nice job ^^ 13:06, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the scars pink to match his warrior? And what Ivyshell said. This is beautiful! 19:41, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded  ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor 20:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scars brighter and maybe more red. They're kinda hard to see.... 21:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Nice. 11:28, 11, 04, 2012

Does it look a bit green to anyone else? It looks kind of green to me. 23:37, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

You're not the only one, Cinder. Not sure if it looks like that to any others, but could you (maybe) get rid of the (possible) green-ish tint? 08:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No, the color looks like the warrior but the warrior's shading is brown tinted so just make the shading a reddish brown color instead of black, keep the base coat the same. 15:40 Thu Apr 12

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  22:41, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm... blur the shading a tad. 23:05, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it any more. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  10:54, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars some more, they're very difficult to see  19:34, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the whole image a bit. 00:57, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  22:16, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 15:52 Sat Apr 21

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  16:12, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

He looks really yellow to me... Up the brown a little? 01:40, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:17, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scars a bit. 20:26, 23, 04, 2012

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:41, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the flank shading a bit. 20:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think that tail scar could be there, cause it's like, fur. Just move it up a tad and make it curve more. Skt ANZAC day  22:41, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪   ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste around the image. If I'm looking at the correct version that is... 06:28, 27, 04, 2012

Dodge (Ro)~ For Approval
\ My first charart. Comments? If the picture isnt showing, its here. ~Fallen 23:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nice for your first charart. ^^ Blur the body shading a bit and slightly define the stripes. 11:22, 11, 04, 2012

Define the stripes they are hard to see 12:18, April 11,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stripes defined and shading blurred more. Thanks, DJ :3 --~Fallen 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This is pretty for a first. Define the earpink at the tips? 22:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image has a yellow-green hue. Fix that? 23:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look yellow-green to me ._. 15:41 Thu Apr 12

I think it just looks yellow... Tone down the highlights(?) a bit. 00:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ear pink. I did`nt use any layers, so I darkened the main color. --~Fallen 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights C: -- Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 01:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading, since I didnt have highlights, and blurred earpink a bit more. --~Fallen 03:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose a little bit. It looks a little neon to me :P 17:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think if you darken or make the base color less yellowish, this could be just about 80% done, in my opinion. 03:18, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.

Well, I don't know much about this but it's been over a week since Fallen's last upload, so I decided to take over. Comments? 04:48, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

According to my clock, it hasn't been over a week...A few more hours. 05:01, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wiki time for me is 5:02 05:07, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's been over a week, so this can stay. Lighten the earpink a bit to make it look less hot pinkish, there's waste under his belly, and I see a slash on his chest and his front leg farthest away from us, is that supposed to be there? And tone down the highlights a tad. 15:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think that slash thing maybe part of the stripes. Can you define the shading a little more? 15:53 Sat Apr 21

There is some waste in between the back left thigh and the under belly, Looks great! :3 -- 20:36, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the striping pattern. I might need to blur it some though :/ 15:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please do. They're too sharp-edged, imho.

Define the shading ;3 20:06, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a lot. And it looks like they're on top of the highlights. Darken and define the shading as well. 19:00, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. If you're using layers I would suggest putting the shading layer on top of the stripes layer. o3o 20:21, 23, 04, 2012  20:21, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know there's a lot of waste Dx please cdoment on something other than that, and I know the eyes and ears are missing too... I'll reupload soon this afternoon. 13:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's supposed to be named like Dodge.rogue.png So, basically, get rid of the extra .png =3 13:34, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but those don't look like stripes....try looking at the tutorials for stripe ideas.

Tons of waste around the art. Color in the eye and the nose. Add earpink. 00:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I know there is waste, and I specifically asked if you would not comment on that since I stated I already knew about it and would be cleaning it up. 03:59, April 25, 2012 (UTC) Reuploaded That's better. I'll get the earpink and waste later 12:55, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's white specks on the tail, and the whole thing looks a little green. 16:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

define the earpink c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:05, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but after discussing with another SM, we've agreed that this isn't 80% complete. You have a week to get this 80% done or it will be declined. Also, there's waste around the image, blurred lineart, and the stripes are triangle tabby stripes. Please fix that. 00:38, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments for Improvement? 23:20, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the highlights/shading so the white stands out? The entire pelt seems gray.

Like that? Changes may not be showing though. 23:29, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful! :3 There are a few areas of shading that you may want to blur (Around the belly area and around the shoulder) 11:42, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole image a tad. It still looks gray 11:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the scars. 17:59, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

D'awwww, I wanted this one Dx Darken the eye color a tiny bit, unless you took it from the leader '-' 21:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

And I think he needs a longer tail. 21:55, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No he doesn't. Only cats like Tallstar, where it's a prominent feature, will get longer tails. 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 20:23, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define and smooth out the shading. 06:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleh, his leader image was tweaked to have a longer tail. 00:30, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

...... It was? e.e *facepalm* It shouldn't have been..... we discussed that before.... *sigh* Well if his leader image has it, I guess it should match... 02:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

So I make the tail longer? 16:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading too? 19:32, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink a little bit, and define the shding on the back leg farthest away from us. 19:42, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading, and smudge the pelt up into the earpink. This is pretty! 03:08, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded DX this is terrible. 20:14, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww... Cinder, this is awesome! White cats are hard, don't insult your art. Blur the shading more, and define the shading on the backs of his legs (if any) and preference but to give it a bit more realistic touch, smudge up where the black meets teh white and then blur. Nice work ^^ 03:08, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the other images, so please don't smudge the black.

Awww! This looks wonderful, Maybe make the scars and earpink a bit less neon. -- 22:57, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thank you all for your kind words ^^ 00:14, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and try to make the scars longer and sharper. 02:46, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 05:17 Sun Apr 22

blur the shading on his back -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  13:10, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh shading. (steals) X3  00:26, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm so sorry for not re-uploading. I've just been really busy 'cause of school, trips and other stuff. I will re-upload tomorrow. Please don't decline this. 00:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Also...I don't know, but could you possibly make the scars a bit thinner? 12:23, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 23:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

The shading sorta looks bloctchy to me. Blur it, maybe? He's puuurdy. X3 00:48, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle (Ro) ~ For Approval
It feels awesome to have another charart up for approval. ♥ Comments? . 06:14, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

8D Thistly~! You're finally uploading again<3 Define the shading on the legs and tail~ 08:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded . 08:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistly<333 Define the earpink a bit. I love this<3 10:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistley <3333 8D. Smudge the stripes a tad more? Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 12:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

This is so much btter than mine <3 Define the earpink. 15:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thansks guys. :) Re-Uploaded . 17:45, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Do you think you can make it match the older rogue a tad more? Just a tiny bit? But that's your choice. 19:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I will have to say no, sorry, As the aritst this was just my way of trying to making it mine, as yours was to you. :3 . 21:28, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Very good Thistley! Define/sharpen the stripes a bit, and make the earpink color match the elder image. 02:42, 14, 04, 2012

Nicely done. Darken the shading some more. 06:20, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Well I was actually wanting to ask if the elders' earpink could be tweaked...because it's sort of an un-natural color. And Re-uploaded. . 22:09, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading. (If you do nominate it, I can do it because I have the .xcf/.pxd file.)  11:40, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Dang, forgot this. I'll Re-upload later today or early tomorrow~! . 17:55, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, are you going to re-upload? It's been 10 days... o3o 13:37, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Sorry, Thistle. =(

May I take over this image? 00:33, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Just go for it and remember to reserve it. xD

Okay, taking over. 00:53, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to be a bother, but Stoneclaw's already doing Silverhawk, and Fallow reserved it first so... ignore me if I'm wrong but yeah... 04:44, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Silverhawk is an original so it doesn't count as a redo for a rogue, which you can only have one at a time, but Fallow did reserve it first. Sorry Stone :c 05:00 Thu Apr 26

Crouchpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Well, TheBoss2 lost their reservation, so I decided to take it up. o3o Comments? 12:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black so we can see the lineart and make the highlights contour more naturally to his body. 13:16, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

And make the earpink a bit more pink 17:33, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink tooo~  Vitus  Cheerful Murderer. 19:34, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made the highlights too bright in contrast to the rest of the body...;.; 22:59, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and define the earpink a tad. 03:21, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:11, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. :3 10:52, 18, 04, 2012

Reuploaded~ 13:32, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 14:31, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 09:51, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink some. C: Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:44, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I would CBA if I was a warrior or something. Hmm... maybe blur teh earpink? (steals from Dazzy) 00:28, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is just a preference, but perhaps make the highlights (if any) more visable. And Mossnose, you need to be a Senior Warrior to CBA images. 02:41, 25, 04, 2012

Reuploaded. I lightened it a bit, because if I define the highlights the image looks all blotchy and...well, you get my point. And Mossnose, I'd rather not blur it, because it'll lose that smudged look. ^^; 07:44, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Vixenkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Yep here she is. I made her eyes orange because I always thought she was an orange/gray cat. Anyway, comments? 01:59, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, if there is any. 02:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:09, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Try adding a highlight to the chest, perhaps? If you don't use them, that's fine. However, they're pretty useful on black cats, who can be a pain in the tush to shade.

Reuploaded I added highlights. 13:26, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose dark grey/black? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  22:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:52, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

define the shading. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  06:59, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 21:37, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, too. 21:46, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:38, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
She was decipted as a gray she cat with thin fur in Secrets of The Clans. Comments? 03:46, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular and blur it a lot. Darken and define the shading as well.

Reuploaded Toned down earpink 03:53, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

If it's thin fur, shouldn't it be shorthaired? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  04:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I would think so...

You need to have a cite for this description in the trivia on Bluestar's page before you can make this. And there must be no question as to whether or not the cat in the image is Bluestar. In any case, if memory serves, most of the images in that book were grayscale anyway, and most didn't have captions explaining which cat was which. Declining unless you can provide the citation. 04:41, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it wasn't a picture. Snowfur said something about her sister having thin gray fur in that story about Mosskit. Secrets of the clans, Page 77. No pictures, it specifically said she had thin gray fur. 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

And I put a cite on the page before I made this. 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

The cite was verified before she even had the image reserved. I checked myself. Changing heading back to "For Approval", since it was talking about Bluefur, and it had nothing to do with a picture.

Blur the earpink, and make it less orange/reddish. 19:59, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:31, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still blur the earpink. 10:20, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:35, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Nice Ivy 08:12, 23, 04, 2012

I don't know if it's just me but it seems that where the shading meets the highlights it looks blotchy. Blur it a bit please, unless anyone disagrees. 02:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I dunno if it's my browser, but it seems fine to me. 22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it does look a bit blotchy to me too. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt ANZAC day  23:00, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Mossy like. X3 Blur the shading. 00:30, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

It seems fine to me as well, however I would encourage you to blur and lighten the earpink. 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think that we decided that Bluestar and all other bluish-gray cats wouldn't get alts. for being described as gray because blue is the scientific word for gray. Look at the talk page. 17:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Violet (Ro) ~ For Approval
x.x Alright. So, I tried to match her as well as I could to her kittypet image, I hope I named the file and headline right, sorry if I didn't. Criticism welcome! :3 05:14, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Realized I made her to creamyish so I made her a bit pinker like her kittypet image. And I added/tweaked a few things. -- 05:28, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a lot. Nice job Raven~ 07:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Beautiful!-- 10:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

You named it wrong, please renamed it Violet.rogue.png and usually when you take over a project you take over their spot, you don't start a new one but its fine for now. 12:01, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and lighten the stripes a tad. And renamed the heading "Violet (Ro) ~ For Approval" Good job. 12:04, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. Wild, you don't always have to take over another user's spot. I just forgot to archive the old one because I was tired last night and never did it before I went to sleep.

Make the earpink a little more red. Lovely~ o3o 14:06, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Made the earpink redder, renamed the file, blurred the shading, lightened the stripes a tad, smudged the stripes. Hope it looks better! -- 18:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded just tried to match her earpink color and pelt color more to her kittypet image. -- 19:04, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

waste around the image~ -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:43, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shouldn't be anymore waste. -- 20:22, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry. I didn't see that trivia point when I looked. 02:28, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Huh, Shelly? Blur the shading along the back the tinniest tiniest bit ever~ It can be your choice, though =3 02:49, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Y'know, it could be my computer, but the earpink looks like it doesn't fill up the whole ear on the left side. Also, define it a little (make it more pink) 02:54, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the earpink color should be fixed. -- 19:37, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little neon. Could you tone it down? o3o <span style="">17:26, 22, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Toned the earpink down :3 -- 19:09, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and round out the shoulder shading. Breeze whisker  19:56, April 22, 2012 (UTC)\

Re-uploaded -- 20:01, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

I see waste all around it. o3o 20:09, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Though I think it's just my computer -.- 20:15, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry! I forgot to get rid of it. -- 01:19, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Add white to the chest. 04:54, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added white to the chest. -- 12:48, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Attention Ok. So I woke up to find my lap top would Not Turn On. It still isn't working, so It might have to be sent in, and so they normally whipe the computer.. So that means I basically lost the .xcf file for Violet.. I Really hope it looks good enough to be approved. Really sorry. -- 01:47, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. After being 99% sure we would have to send my lap top in, it turned on, and I emailed myself the .xcf, so the .xcf is Not gone. -- 19:54, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt ANZAC day  22:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading, if I blur it anymore it will disappear xD -- 00:00, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think it necessarily needs blurring, but I would define the lighting on the haunch and chest and tone down the flank/back shading. 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tried to define the shading more. -- 04:37, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smooth out that shading some more, if not, do what 'Teldy said. :3 <span style="">08:26, 26, 04, 2012

x.x If you guys want, I can put the shading layer to full opacity, take a screenshot and show you guys that I can't really make it anymore smooth/blurred etc, if I do it will just kind of fade away xD -- 09:29, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit more pink-- 14:58, April 26, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Boulder (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Boulder was shown as a solid light gray tom on pg. 76 of The Rise of Scourge. Comments for improvement? 13:38, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink and enlarge the earpink as well. Also rename this  13:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploded Also, why don't you rename it. I don't know how. 13:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Because she's not an admin. It's not that difficult. Go into whatever program you use, choose "Save AS", and name it "Boulder.warrior.alt.png" and when you upload it to the Wiki, it will be named that. 13:50, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Sort of) just renamed the file with a new image. 13:56, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular. 14:54, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smooth it out so it's not so blotchy. 18:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes might not be showing. 19:48, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink more. 20:21, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smooth out the shading. <span style="">02:21, 21, 04, 2012

Also blur the earpink. 20:55, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. It might be just me, but it looks like they're rectangle-y. Spark Love me some chocolate~! ♥ 22:02, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I really hate blurring. 16:29, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular. <span style="">20:23, 23, 04, 2012 20:23, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading? c: -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  22:53, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I still really hate blurring. 19:08, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

You may not like blurring, but blur the shading more. :3 00:33, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink. <span style="">02:36, 25, 04, 2012

Reuploaded I can't blur the shading or highlights anymore. 18:12, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks a little blotchy. Blur it more if you can, or redo it. 20:46, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a little as well. 07:46, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink more. <span style="">08:19, 26, 04, 2012

Reuploaded 17:20, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:06, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Ro) - CBA
Taking five days to do this like a boss. 19:01, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Rawr, I wanted to this >:< But I love it! <33 Define the earpink and I think you may be missing some stripes on the stomach, but not sure. 20:20, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

(steals) She's a cutie. X3 Is the pelt already smudged into the earpink? It might be just my computer, though. 00:35, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:14, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit? 07:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

It matches her queen. 21:09, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

CBA?

Thistleclaw (Ro) ~ For Approval
Figured I should post him now lol. Woohoo I've done two of his images now! Yay? I'll never understand to method of shading on this, it seems like all highlights and no shading o3o I must have had zero sanity as an apprentice x.x Comments? 01:18 Tue Apr 24

Hold on. When did we come to a consensus that DF characters get a rogue pixil? (I can see the logic but I don't remember ever coming to an agreement) 01:22, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowfeather has one. Therefore they should all get one. 01:29, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

But where have we actually come to a conclusion that every DF cat would get one? Because if it hasn't been stated anywhere and made sure that everyone agrees to it, none should be reserved or up for approval. 01:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

No, nobody has commented on the darn discussion in ages. >.> But if we agree that Redwillow should get one for turning against his Clan, all of them should get one too with that logic. 04:33, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. I luvs it. :3 00:37, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading. Beautiful. 12:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Snowtuft (Ro) ~ For Approval
Sparrowfeather's main image is a rogue image, so Snowtuft gets one as well.

Smudge the scar sideways to match the warrior. 02:14, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

If they're getting rogue images, I don't think it matters. Sparrowfeather no longer has a warrior image on her article, so neither would Snowtuft.

Perhaps make the scar a tad thinner? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  02:57, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Add/Define the shading on the chest as it would appear unnatural when in accordance to the light source if there is no lighter shading. And perhaps taper the scar to a point when it appears on the flank. 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

'Teldy, you are aware that I don't actually use a light source when shading my images, right? Regardless, the shading on this bothers me, so I'm going to re-do it anyways.

Re-uploaded.

Thin out the scar and sharpen it, also, it blends into the earpink at the top, can you fix that? Blur the shading. 00:27, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Redwillow (Ro) ~ For Approval
So we're doing this? (shrugs) Comments? 02:02, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the mottles. =P <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey  03:00, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a bit?-- 14:56, April 26, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the haunch shading. 09:21, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Silverhawk (Ro) ~ For Approval
Woo~ Since we're doing the dark forest residents as rogues...I guess he should have one. Eh, I did a bad job on this image. >.< Comments for Improvement? 05:17, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Needs to be ragged  05:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

The color and the pattern seem to be a little off. I can email you the .xcf file of his warrior image if you want? c: 20:22, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the image. I had fun with the ragged fur. c: 03:11, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Ermm...I just fixed something. Reuploaded. 03:13, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to do this, but (if you want) thinnen out the ragged fur w=by around 1-2 pixels? owo :/ <span style="">08:07, 26, 04, 2012

deinfe the stripes owo -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:31, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm not defining the stripes since if I did that, they wouldn't match the warrior. It's just the ragged fur that maybe blocks out the visibility of the stripes...And honestly, I like the ragged fur lineart the way it is. 23:14, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Antpelt (Ro) ~ For Approval
Since we are redoing the Dark Forest cats as rogues, I chose Antpelt. Any comments for improvements? 11:04, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

sharpen the scars and thin them out a little bit -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  12:59, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  14:09, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yay! Antpelt is awesome x3 Blur the tail shading and define the scars. 21:36, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  10:03, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading, and I think the sideways scars should extend down the back more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt ANZAC day  10:06, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Did what Trolly told me to do. XD   <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...   11:07, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

He needs more horizontal scars. 01:52, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients...  13:25, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. ♫Purplemoon♪  ♪Reduce, Reuse, Recycle!♪  21:07, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lightened shading <span style="background-image:-moz-radial-gradient(center,#00FBFF,#FF00FF); -moz-border-radius: 12px 4px; -webkit-border-radius: 12px 4px; padding: 1px 5px 0px 5px;"> Berry Gradients, gradients... 08:53, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Ro) - For Approval
He's sexy and he knows it <3 Unfortunately, someone  couldn't imagine who.. made the muzzle too small on the rogue blanks, so I could only fit two of his scars. He's a wizard and can heal scars. But just one. 01:58, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on his haunch ^^ -- Eki  A wonderful king ❤  19:03, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. owo 01:49, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, he ain't sexy. Not after what he did. Anyway, perhaps you could put the tip of a scar under his nose? Because on the warrior, the scar goes through his nose. Do I make sense? XP <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Knock knock  23:35, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. A) - For Approval
Mentioned as pale gray as an apprentice. Adding the cite in now. Comments? 15:37, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shadin'. Nice job, Paleh~ 12:00, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think that we decided that Bluestar and all other bluish-gray cats wouldn't get alts. for being described as gray because blue is the scientific word for gray. Look at the talk page. 17:05, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

I know that bluestar, but this is pale gray. that's different. She'd still get an alt. 17:06, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, Shelly said that they wouldn't get pale gray or dark gray alts. either. 17:28, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - That's not decided yet. This stays till then. 21:56, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur or smudge (your choice) the shading on the shoulder? I love it. :D 00:59, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, I can barely make out the shoulder shading as is.... I'd rather not blur it too much. 01:06, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shredtail (Ro) - For Approval
Meh... Comments? 02:11, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

o3e I thought I reserved this. :S -shrugs- You can have it anyway. Oh, and maybe define the shading a tad? <span style="">06:39, 27, 04, 2012

It might be my computer, but the stripes on the bald spot of his tail look their going off the tail. Pure Awesomeness. :3 18:52, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (Ro) ~ For Approval
First one. *Crosses fingers* =P ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ <font color="red" style="background:none;">♥ <font color="blue" style="background:none;"> Live <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> like <font color="blue" style="background:none;"> there's no <font color="purple" style="background:none;"> tomorrow!  <font color="red" style="background:none;">♥  18:58, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...not bad, apprentice. Darken the shading, define it and blur it, as it's a little blotchy. I'd say this is 80% done. Changing heading to "For Approval", and I'll make you an apprentice.

Upload it over the old file. File:Jag.lo.png 19:21 Fri Apr 27