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Stonefur(A)~ For Approval
Here he is! Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:47, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Take out the shredded ears. We typically assume that the injuries occur in the warrior rank unless the cat is mentioned with them as a kit or apprentice. 16:02, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Do i remove the scars aswell or not? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I imagine when his ears got shredded those scars came along with it as well. Give him a gray nose unless he's like his sister and has a pink one 16:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

* shakes head* he has a pink nose. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:18, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:25, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:39, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the earpink and darken it a bit, smooth out the shading on the haunch, it's a bit blotchy, and make the highlight/lighter part of the tail go all to way down, not just at the tip. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay....sorry i was busy....I'll get to it in a second.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:17, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink. And it looks like he has a lighter muzzle. 12:19, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawning, read what i said on Rosepetal.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:22, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? 13:18, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, alright I completely redid it. I have been wanting to do Stonefur's apprentice and now I can! 14:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

I changed the heading if thats alright..... 01:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, define the light on the face and back, and darken the shading on your haunch 05:06, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I can't work on this today because I have this on a different computer. 14:26, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED 13:59, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the sides of the pelt into the earpink. 22:05 Fri Jan 13

Also blur the earpink. 23:32, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink hun. 21:53, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading, it looks odd. o3o Sky-  Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  22:07, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be reuploaded tomorrow or it'll be declined for a lack of work  03:21, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project may take over  02:50, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3  13:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Course. :)  Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:30, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:41, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the color of the earpink be the same in both ears. 23:55, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

They are the same color. It looks different because of the shading. 00:05, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. 00:10, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

No. Don't. He was described with a pink nose. 00:13, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, all of Bluestar's kits have pink noses. ^^ Smudge the earpink into the pelt more. Sky-  Watchu want? 11:47, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Well then put shading on the other ear or something..because they don't look normal. One of them is neon, but the other is fine. 21:48, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:00, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit smaller and even out the shading; the head and shoulders looks darken than the haunch and tail xP 04:05, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:54, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur th earpink into the fur a little. -- 17:31, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:20, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Why are all his images different colors? XD Anyways, I think this is ready. CBA? :) 15:09, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to disturb the CBA, but in his description, it says "light." Shouldn't this and the other images be lightened, as it's in the description. 09:54, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lighten him up. I'll tell the html coloring for him so all his images will match. 13:04, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

This looks good to me. CBA? 23:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, Silver, but I don't see where your light source is. Your shading is kinda inconsistent. 02:16 Sun Jan 29


 * lol Remember to change the heading, Wildy xP 04:40, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. I want to work on a loner image. 11:51, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You're withdrawing this? Can I take over? 17:08, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

I took over, Re-uploaded =3 21:59, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more. 02:45, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

I think the shading could be blurred more Sky Dovahkiin  03:24, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken te nosepink, it's very neon. -- Elo legs 13:51, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took the nose-pink from Silver's apprentice Stonefur, but I still darkened it. 22:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. 03:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, he's described as light and all his images will be tweaked for that. And lighten the shading and dull the earpink. 18:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Beetlenose (A) ~ For Approval
Here he is. Comments? 16:52, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten him up, then add shading. The lineart is very hard to see. 17:28, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is my computer or does he look like a really dark brown but not black. Acornflight  Med. Cat of LunarClan! 20:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably your computer and '''re-uploaded. ''' 20:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC) I can barely see the shading. Darken or define it. 00:31, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

Re-Uplaoded. 22:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour a lot and add some depth to the eyes. 22:54 Sun Jan 1

Blur the earpink a lot. 03:18, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 18:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base colour more and blur the shading. Smudge the earpink into the ear with a smaller brush so it looks like fur. 02:23 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. 21:30, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 02:15 Wed Jan 4

Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot. 23:06, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and shoulder 05:07, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. 16:38, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you maybe lighten the shading on the face...? It looks a little dark on my screen... 17:54, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this. My time on Wikia "has been limited", says Mom and Dad. 01:18, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. I withdrew Firestar  Squishee    I am le Puppeh!  04:22, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay it doesn't look like it, but it's different. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:35, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Remember to change the heading. Nice work, but define and blur the shading/highlights and blur the earpink. 00:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry I forgot to change the heading. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:33, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

blur the earpink and redden it, and either brighten the highlights, or lighten the base coat. It's too dark to see the shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  15:51, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did it using the colors from the warrior. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  16:30, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Nice. 01:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not gonna change it unless somebody else says so. I took all of the colors from the warrior. Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  01:19, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 14:35 Mon Jan 16

Blur the earpink. 00:04, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the light parts lighter, I can hardly see him. o3o Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  01:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm working on two solids? Oh, joy! :\ Sandlegs  What's up with  Leggy? 01:13, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Everything's up with Leggy. xD Anyway, can you smudge the earpink into the ear a little more? 01:24, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Umm if I do, whitch I tryed, it looks really horrible and bad. And I cant blur it easily... oh yeah I know why, because your awesome. End of the world xD Sandlegs  What's up with  Leggy? 01:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

It's spelt 'tried'. ^^ Try smudging into the ear using the sides of the earpink, it just seems to go up from the middle. ^^ <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  10:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded well you know I cant spell! Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 01:00, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make the smudges look natural by making it a bit smaller. 02:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

No offence, but the earpink smudge looks like a blob. Smudge the pelt into the corner of the ears please. <span style="">22:14 Thu Jan 19

Reuploaded Okay now does it look better? Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 22:32, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink some more. 03:59, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt a little so that the shading is more noticeable. 03:49, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the corners of the earpink. <span style="">20:56 Sat Jan 21

Make the "highlights" a bit more noticeable. It almost looks like you just filled him in with black. 21:43, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry but the base color is taken exactly from the warrior. The shading is also taken from his...sorry. Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 03:05, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

I think this looks fine, CBA? 04:44, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but smudge the (<---)corner of the (--->) ear more, oter wise this is perfect. 02:56, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the earpink. 09:56, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the back leg shading. <span style="">19:15 Sat Jan 28

Lighten the earpink so that it matches the warrior. 20:10, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I think this'll be my last reupload because...well look at my user page. Anyway all of the colors are from the warrior. I hope nobody kills me >_>;;;  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave! 17:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Scorchfur (A) ~ CBA
I think this is the last spot! This is my first as an apprentice, from 02:41, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! There's some waste by the ear on ---> that side and on that side of the tail. This is great Mooneh! Squishee   I am le Puppeh!  02:47, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks! 02:56, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's specks of waste around the charart, and part of the earpink closest to us leaked onto the back of the ear, could you erase that? 03:07, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Just tell me if you see any more waste, I tried to get it all. 03:23, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 03:24, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Smudged, got rid of the waste. 03:43, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the... I don't know if that's a highlight or part of the normal fur, "spot" on the haunch a tad. 14:34, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

There's a chunk of waste below the hind paw closest to us, and flecks of waste around his paws. 17:13, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''So much waste! XD 19:03, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on the hindleg. <span style="">19:54 Sat Dec 31

Re-uploaded. I blurred. =3 22:15, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Is the haunch highlighted? If so lighten it. 16:11, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Light enough? 20:27, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the face a bit. Looks nice :3. I dont know if its my computer, but there is a little waste on the sides of the tail.--User: Fallenstars 23:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The highlight on the haunch seems to be too big. Make it kind of rounder and smaller. 03:05, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I really made it worse, but see to it. =3 21:42, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

There is still some waste around the tail. 21:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. If there's any more waste, I'm a mouse. =3 22:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a mouse ;) there's some above his tail. Smudge the earpink into the ear some more. <span style="">02:33 Tue Jan 3

There is also some more waste near the base of his tail. 21:10, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *squeaks like a mouse* I know there's more waste...go ahead, point it out. XD 22:04, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on both of his hind paws. ♫Purplemoon♪  2012! The end of the world?  01:54, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

And around his head. 04:09, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy =3 21:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The part at the base of the tail looks kind of like a highlight, darken that part. 01:28, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is that better, or too dark? I smudged and blurred it a lot to blend it in but still be darker. 03:46, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the earpink is smudged into the cheek. Erase that and make it black. <span style="">02:54 Wed Jan 11

Re-uploaded. There you are. Enjoy. =3 23:52, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's waste around the head. 02:07, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, that was when I fixed his ear from Sweetflower's advice. 16:07, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

His earpink does not look defined enough, but it is fine if it matches his other images. Just Call Me Crazy! ~Chez 22:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. Otherwise it looks great, Mooneh! 22:29, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? 18:16, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Better. Darken the shading a bit more and blur it, and it should be ready. 23:34, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy =3 21:22, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

He looks too dark to me. Make the light parts lighter? <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution  23:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope it looks better! 11:28, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Give him a torn ear since he was described with it as an apprentice I believe. And either brighten the highlights, or lighten the whole image if you don't use them. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:28, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

There is some waste/miscolored lineart on his back foot closest to us. 15:45, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gah, forgot the waste. -.- Do that later. Paleh, I don't want to give him a torn ear unless you know for sure he got it as an apprentice. 01:20, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. 01:41, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Lovely~ 01:44, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Twi! 15:14, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, also, I looked at Scorchfur's other apprentice image, and it didn't have a torn ear...So unless it was approved wrong, I'm not tearing his ear. =) 00:31, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waster beside his chin. 09:28, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 09:43, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the haunch "highlight" (if it is one)? :3  21:23, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but okay...=) 22:43, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten and redden the ear-pink a bit more. 04:06, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Reddening it made it brighter, so enjoy. (Yes, I see the waste by his ears). 09:41, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill his whole ears, it looks like it doesn't quite right now. And lighten the base coat a bit to match the warrior. 22:36, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Could you darken the nose a tad? Not too much, though... <span style="">00:32, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

How would I lighten the base coat? Because I think using the dodge tool would make it too light, but when I colorpick from the warrior, if I just slab a color on there, I might blur it into the shading/highlights...Gosh. I need to tear his ear. I Found where he got it, and he was an apprentice. -.- 10:15, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

This is taking too long. Withdrawing. Anyone who wants to work on it can go right ahead. 11:34, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I will take this over, if that's okay, however, I can't reupload until Monday or Tuesday because I have to go to a hockey game and I'm busy on sunday, I might be able to upload today, not sure...&#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 15:22, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 17:52, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the earpink? 20:06, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be "Under Evaluation" because Oakbreeze is a kit? 09:58, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Purty! Blur the earpink a bit! <span style="">23:58 Sat Jan 28

I hate to do this but I'm declining it because I'd like to reserve Shadow's loner. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 19:50, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure you change the heading when you do withdraw your image, Oakbreeze :) Did it for you this time. Anyone with a free project may take over  22:28, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 04:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- 00:19, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I can't see anything to fix, so CBA? 02:29, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (A) - For Approval


Never thumb an image. Also, you have to re-upload this over Cedarheart's apprentice image. Also, make the ear-pink fill the ear completely. Add depth to the eyes, blur teh shading and highlights a lot. 21:30, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How is it? This might be a stupid question, cause I'm not a computer wizard, but what does "thumb" mean? *dies of embarassment*

It means it has the frame around it, or something and says who it was added by. Blur highlights (if there are any) and blur ear-pink, a lot, and define shading. Also, don't forget to sign with ~ 22:49, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, but can someone help me delete the thumbed one? I can't seem to find a way to do it..... sorry. 23:04, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, blur it plenty more, the ear-pink still needs to fill the ear completely, define the shading. 23:16, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should Add depth to the eyes... 02:19, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink, its too hot pinkish. Rainface, Leafy already said to define the shading. :P 21:13, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I just need I reminder on define-ing shading on gimp 2.6, and then I'm covered. Also, I don't want to be rude, but Rainface on your second comment what do you want me to blur? the shading or the earpink? help? 21:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste where haunches are and it seems flat. Plus it seems like you smudged where you need to blur. Shading could be gaussian blurred. 08:05, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think you added shading so you need to add some. Darken the nosepink. Blur the highlights a ton, though that was already mentioned, I think. And Twi, adding depth to the eyes is the artist's choice. 12:10, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

She knows Ferret, It's just a suggestion. The earpink needs to fill the whole ear, than the pelt smudged into it. <span style="">20:01 Thu Jan 5

In my opinion, I think the nose color is find. I think you should lighten it just a tad instead. 20:59, January 5, 2012 (U

Reuploaded I did everything except gaussin blur. I'll be on vacation for couple days as well 15:20, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more reddish-gray, like his warrior & elder images, and blur the highlights (If someone's already said this, just disregard it). 04:36, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and darken the shading. 16:33, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a whole bunch. It looks too blotchy.

Are you working on this? It's been 7 days ._. 16:11, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. If any user wishes to take over, they may. 21:37, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I will, please. 21:43, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, didn't Mossnose say she wasn't going to be back to the 13th? So shouldn't she get to post it again when she comes back? Just wondering... <span style="">22:17 Sat Jan 14

Maybe so, but more than a week without work slows the process of the project and the project's goal. 06:26, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If she's not working on it, I could take over. I just noticed the heading change. If she's going to continue, that's fine, just an offer. 01:53, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Go for it. 15:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Alright then. I'll get working. 15:26, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Changed heading. 20:20, January 16, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Smudge th epelt into the earpink and define the depth in the eyes if there is any. <span style="">20:25 Mon Jan 16

Re-Uploaded - Man I am bad at those eyes. 21:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Smudge the earpink more? 02:08, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, and darken the shading at the base of the tail, on the neck, and between the back and front legs (where would that be, the flank?) <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

(Yes, I think that's the flank :P) <span style="">21:05 Sat Jan 21

Hey guys. I am so sorry I wasn't able to come on, my computer crashed, and I can't access anything. I'll try to get on when I can on my kindle, and I think Shadewing's doing a way better job than I was anyway. :p 00:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Shadey? 04:08, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry guys. Got really busy. 20:54, January 24, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

It's been a few days without comments, let's go CBA  06:38, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for interrupting! The legs farthest from us are lighter than those closer. They should be darker. 17:50, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The neck shading could also be darkened, the head shading should go along with the light source, and the highlights should either be darkened, or the base coat should if you don't use them. 09:50, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I will get all those things done soon, but one thing concerns me. I just checked out his other blanks, and they are lighter than this. If I darken it anymore, it won't really match his other blanks. I will still darken, if that is what you wish, just bringing up a point. 23:54, January 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Eh, I'm not a huge fan of him right now. Comments? 21:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Littlecloud (A) ~ For Approval
All colors are from his medicine cat. Comments? 08:35, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt inot the earpink more, on the sides of the earpink. <span style="">17:45 Tue Jan 3

Define the stripes and color his nose brown. 20:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Thinen out the shading on the haunch if that makes sence. <span style="">01:51, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Reuploaded. Naw, I got that, DJ ;) But I think I broke Littlecloud...and the burn tool hates me. XO 02:56, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded really quick. I think I fixed him ^^; 10:18, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and the shading, add some stripes to the legs, and blur the ear-pink. 04:08, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'll darken the shading and add stripes to the legs, but I'll only darken the stripes if someone else agrees. I got them directly from his MC. 11:18, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Scarlet. The stripes could be darkened just a tad. Try this hex: 732F0C 05:25, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid him again...but I like him better =3 05:19, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

The color seems to be a bit ginger compared to the others. Try matching the MCA a bit closer. 15:09, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 09:30, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 22:17, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 00:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. x.x 07:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

The color is still off. 20:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Too ginger or brown? Or...what? xP 10:01, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Too ginger and too dark. Lighten it, make it less ginger, and define the stripes a bit. Try color-picking from the apprentice image. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:23, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *pants* I died in the making, and shifted the light angle. 01:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

If you died, you wouldn't have been able to post that. Define the shading. 01:55, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Moonleaf...I was joking. Anyways, reuploaded. 03:09, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I smoothed him out a tad, and brightened him, because he was looking squarish. It doesn't look like a big change but...ah, well. 03:27, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Extend the stripes a bit more and curve them a bit. 04:10, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've been tweaking up his shading, too. ;) 10:55, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit too ginger? Are you color picking? And if so, from which image? Maybe try his apprentice if you're not already. 22:35, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm colorpicking, yes. I used the MC at first, then tried his MCA. Oh, and Pale, this is his apprentice x) 04:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant MCA. XD And I think you're picking from the shading area then, if you're color picking. It's too dark and ginger. Try picking from and area with little or not shading, like the haunch, or the face. 15:07, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Dazzle? <span style="">02:09 Sun Jan 29

Yea, still working. XO Alright, thanks Pale, we'll see how this goes...reuploaded. Pixlr only lets me blur/smudge on same layer, so don't ask why I constantly redo if it's a color-change. 09:16, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes on the haunch and darken the shading a tad. Purdy C: -- Elo legs 13:47, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little more. 15:21, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A) - For Approval
Here she is, Tawnyfur! I know it's a fail. I haven't done a real charart since 2010. So therefore, you shall reteach me (yes, I looked at the tutorials)! So.....Bring On The Critism! Oh yeah...I may re-do the shading if I have to......again, sorry, it fails. 07:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Figured out how to fix shading and other stuff. -- 08:43, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I love fixing stuff in the course of a few hours. Oh, and for those who don't recognize the name..... look in the first arc, somewhere between books 3-6 -- 10:04, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. This time I gaussian blurred it. But I left waste *dies* I'll try to remove it... hopefully. -- 10:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you =3 20:56, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred. 21:03, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around the image. 21:11, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading and according to my wand tool, I removed all the waste. Does the ear look weird? 22:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear looks good, but the pelt needs to be smudged into the earpink. Also, there looks like there i slighter fur next to the ear. 22:21, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There you go. -- 23:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 00:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. a cat ♣  named Cheshire  Most Everyone's Mad Here... 23:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure the whole belly is shaded. <span style="">06:43, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Reuploaded. Turns out I was blurring the earpink instead of smudging. Oops. Oh, and I did this without smudging the earpink that much, beacause I've got somewhere to be, so please wait, remind me, and I'll uploade later today/tommorrow 14:59, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? 01:36, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded wrong version. Once again, comments on my now beautiful Tawnyfur? 05:12, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

It's been about two days. Comments? 06:00, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. Also, can we tweak her images to look more golden brown? This is yellow, not golden brown. If we do, then we might as well start with the apprentice while it's up, so change that if anyone agrees. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred, but I didn't change the color. Please don't make me start over. Isn't the only thing that matters is that the image matches the warrior's image? 07:28, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more  17:09, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did it a couple times over actually....I wasn't happy with the haunches so I followed my instincts and used highlights. Hope it doesn't look ugly. -- 20:35, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

It's been about 2 days since a comment, so...comments (sorry I'm impatient)? -- 18:37, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 21:42, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:52, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and blur it as it just seems inconsistant :3 20:24, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I killed it *sob*. Anyway, I can't seem to get the shading consistent. But I blurred everything and found some waste. 23:14, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and is it just me, or does the shading seem.... gray-er than it does on the warrior? <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:21, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I won't say grayer. But shading on the warrior seems lighter less saturated, so lighten the shading desaturate it. o3o sorry I was wrong before. 01:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading more consistant and define it. It looks like it's all smudged and blurred together. <span style="">18:37 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded. Pretty much redid it. I made the shading less gray and desaturated it. There was also some lineart misfunction, but I fixed it following the shorthaired female apprentice lineart. 02:45, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. <span style="">21:50 Wed Jan 25

Reuploaded, I blurred til my hand was sore. 09:36, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well, It needs blurring more, but i want only say: expand the higlinks/light parts and lighten the shadings a bit 17:08,January 27,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred, but if I expand the highlights the whole cats looks messed up. 17:57, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a touch greenish too me. What color are you using for shading? I've always found that using a rich, dark brown on tawny and brown cats works better. Redden the ear-pink a bit. 05:18, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. 10:01, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you world, for the creation of the color replacement tool. 04:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurreded. 19:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shadin, and lighten it especially on the hind paw's heel. <span style="">15:42 Tue Jan 31

Darken the paws and the chest and blur the earpink. 18:07, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Alt.A) - Withdrawn


Er....yeah.....so......comments?.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:08, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the earpink a little more? 18:49, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I love Rowans :D Blur the shading more. 01:39, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if it's supposed to be like that but the forehead stripe looks like an m. 02:17, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Yes mommy, thats how its supposed to look. Thats how it looked in the Manga. And i'll upload in a sec. Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:48, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:51, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

The shading placement seems odd. The highlight on the haunch is facing downward, so the shoulder highlight should too. Because, right now, it seems as if you have to light sources, one coming from upward and one coming from downward. If the haunch highlight stays as it is, then the shoulder highlight should be moved a little more downward, and possibly eliminate the highlights along the back. If you don't want to change too much, then I suggest moving the haunch highlight upward more. But, I might be wrong, the haunch highlight seems to be facing downward, if true, change that the way I said to. 01:27, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be reuploaded tomorrow, or it'll be declined for a lack of work 03:18, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project may take over 02:44, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I believe I have a free project since my time is up. I'll take over Sandlegs  What's up with  Leggy? 22:00, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I don't like it! Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 23:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and define the shading on the haunch and tail. 01:02, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose grey. 02:03, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black go in kind of an M with two spikes, not one. As that's what he was shown with in the manga. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  15:59, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue"> Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:17, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the side of the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">18:46 Sat Jan 21

And add depth to the eyes. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 22:24, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 23:42, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Sandstorm? 04:11, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I am I'm just really really busy. I'm on the vacation list so.... I'm gonna try to upload this tonight. Sandlegs What's up with  Leggy? 00:22, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did it because the M thing was hard. :/ Sandlegs  What's up with  Leggy? 03:17, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat a bit. He was shown pretty pale in the manga. 22:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little more? 00:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also darken the nose color a little more? He looks awkward with a lighter-colored nose. o3o 02:04, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

The M-thing could be blurred a wee bit more 13:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more; it looks a bit...flat. -- 17:29, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt color. In the manga, he's a pretty light gray. 05:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  23:28, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 03:08, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm so sorry but well look at my userpage. I hope that somebody will do great on this! *mutters to self*  Sandy    I think   Daddy's   my slave! 17:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Don't forget to change the heading Sand! ;) PCA will miss you. D= Anyways, anyone with a free project may take over. 00:42, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (A) ~ For Approval
I am posting this behalf of Thistleshine who can't post this yet. Comments? 03:51, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Fill the ear with earpink and add the highlights to the eyes. 03:54, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes and blur the highlights a lot. Also, define the shading. 04:08, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart all around, mainly on the paws. And add highlights/lighter part to the face. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:10, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color. 22:42, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Also, you're using the wrong blank. It needs to be the short furred female, not the long furred. 20:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, but still have to change to short fur. Thanks everybody.

Thistleshine 21:36, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

After you change it, blur the shading a lot. 21:39, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. Short fur now. Comments, please? <3

Thistleshine 05:08, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, and the shading on the back. 21:40, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. Pretty good? Comments please and thank you.

Thistleshine 17:04, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

There are some miscolored spots on the side of the haunch 19:08, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur where the "highlights" meet the shading. Lighten the nose color a bit, and smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. 01:20, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">03:48 Wed Jan 18

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. <span style="">22:28 Wed Jan 18

Reuploaded. Comments, please and thank you? <3 -- 01:18, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading/"highlights". You use SAI, correct? If so, I'd recommend Pixlr or Gimp. 01:23, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Thanks for all the support and comments you guys. <3

There's some waste by the haunch/tail. Also, blur the shading more, and get rid of the lighter strip on the back of the haunch. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:19, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

And there's a speck of waste near the haunch. 02:04, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? -- 11:37, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Sai's still good. Do you use layers with SAI? If you do, then blurring the shading would be easy. I could teach you if you would like me to. Anyway, the shading still needs blurring. 19:46, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'm kind of confused with the whole layers thing, please teach me. I just signed up for the mentor program, thanks for offering. I'll do a reupload as soon as I can learn.

Reuploaded. Help from mentor, completely redone.

The shading needs defined. 03:57, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely, my apprentice! Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 04:00, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged and defined. Thanks for the support.

Smudge the earpink in a bit more, take the earpink color from the warrior, and make the white in the eye on the other side of the pupil. Where's there's a black speck missing. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  00:07, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Lovely. ^^ -- 02:16, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tail shading defined, moved pupil, changed ear colour. I'm going to smudge the ear in a moment. Comments?

Blur the haunch shading. It...disturbs me. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 06:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the haunch the best I could. Sorry about the disturbance. ^^; 04:17, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 04:19, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. She looks better, thanks for all the comments. CBA? C': 04:37, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle, you can't CBA your own image unless you are a SM. Define the shading. <span style="">02:38, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Reuploaded. Defined shading. Sorry, DJ, I never really understood CBA. And do you mean Senior Warrior?(SW) 07:08, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch. -- Elo legs 13:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that any better? I hate that haunch. >> 01:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

That's okay. A Senior Member (SM) is a Senior Warrior, deputy or leader. Smudge the pelt into the earpink some more. <span style="">03:10, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Reuploaded. All smudged. Any more comments? She's gotta get through sometime with a mentor such as Stony. ;3 03:17, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Nice! The earpink and shading seems perfect, so CBA? 03:20, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry for inturrupting CBA, but can you darken the tail shading? ;.; <span style="">23:58 Wed Feb 1

That's alright. Reuploaded. 00:31, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? -- 03:42, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really super sorry, but, could you move the eye highlight over one pixel? Mostly because I'm pretty sure that's why there's a missing pixel there. And make the pixel completely white? ･ω･ 03:53, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
How did no one claim her yet? Impressive. Anyways, comments? It's the silver alt, but do you guys think I should lighten her a bit more? 06:30, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't thin kyou need to lighten her, just the shading a tad, which should also be blurred a tiny bit. You also should blur the pelt into the earpink. Otherwise, looks great. 06:34, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd actually forgotten to finish up the ear pink. That's what I get for doing five things at once... Anyways, re-uploaded. Thanks. 06:39, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. 16:27, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the light part of her shoulder a little more? And I'll CBA this. Nice job 18:39, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:47, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

As promised, CBA? ^^ 03:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Cloudy. Darken the shading. <span style="">03:44 Wed Jan 18

And lighten of some of the shading on the haunch. Breeze whisker  03:56, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

You guys are picky. >.> Re-uploaded. 18:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly give her green eyes, she was mistakenly described with that. 02:07, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the haunch "highlight" a bit bigger, very pretty Cloudy! :) 04:13, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this Cloudy? It's been 5 days. -- 06:22, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy, I'm so sorry, but I have to decline this due to lack of work :c Anyone with a free project may take over  06:37, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do it. 13:12, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:47, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add depth to the eyes. <span style="">02:00 Sun Jan 29

The eyes look very neon, darken them a tad. -- Elo legs 16:06, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light part of the tail. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  07:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (A) ~ For Approval
Splashpelt reserved it, but didn't put it up, and its past 2 weeks...so here it is. Comments? 00:28, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Smudge the pelt into the ear pink more. 00:31, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Re-Uploaded. 00:32, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful! Blur the shading on the haunch. Edit conflicts x.x 00:34, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Look at the innocent face on that evil'un. o3o If there is shading there, define it on the back paw furtherest away. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:38, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, there's no shading on that paw. I blurred the shading. Re-Uploaded. 00:52, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should give him a couple scars on his face. I know we normally assume that scars are obtained while a cat is a warrior, but considering his name... Well, yeah. Might just be me. 00:56, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Well, there isn't any proof, so I won't. Sorry, but it would probably just get removed, like Tornear's torn ear, because it was based on assumption based on the name. 01:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, for all we know, he could've gotten the warrior name Clawfoot. Can you blur the back shading a little? 03:29, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, there's a cite for his scars in his description. Tornear's ear was removed because there was no cite. 03:43, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

As an appentice though? It just said he was mentioned as being so-and-so's apprentice (I just skimmed quickly) 04:09, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. o3o <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 21:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not adding scars...sorry, but there isn't any proof. Like Ivy said, he wasn't mentioned having scars as an apprentice. Re-Uploaded. 23:14, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. 02:09, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink more 00:49, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I would make it a bit lighter to match his warrior charart... to me it kind of seems dark. 22:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The color is the same, but I was told to define shading, so I had to darken it a little. I got the colors from the warrior charart, though, so its fine. Re-Uploaded. 22:48, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ok. If you want to make it look lighter anyways and you have photoshop, you can do that by choosing a slightly light foreground color and using overlay with the paint bucket. 23:12, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think the color is fine as it is. 23:40, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading a bit. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale  Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  00:00, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:50, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm leaving. Someone can take over. 23:58, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 23:59, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I have 3 projects already. 16:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over.17:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made him lighter because of his rouge image...but I'll change it back if anybody dislikes the colour. 18:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please change it back, the color doesn't really match either of his images now. It was fine before. And darken the shading a bit. 22:10, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 01:50, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some. <span style="">02:35, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Mak ethe earpink less neon please. <span style="">19:08 Mon Jan 30

Re-Uploaded O.o I think I made it worse. Oh well..I'll just play with it for a bit see what happens xD..I personally think the earpink is fine but if anybody else wants me too I'll change it. 00:29, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading. ;D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  08:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 17:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit. <span style="">01:38, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-Uploaded 00:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front paw away from us. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  01:48, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the shading a tad. <span style="">04:50 Thu Feb 2

Hawkfrost (A) - For approval
Thanks Silver for lettin me have him! 8D Bah. Fail image is fail. 17:46, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

See? I told you you'd make this amazing! Lighten the shading where the front haunch and back meet. 21:20, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look too green, so make them more blueish. Feel free to disagree. <span style="">02:33, Thu, Jan, 19, 2012

I think the eyes look fine. They look like they match the warrior to me. Anyways, lighten the earpink a bit more to match the warrior and this'll be perfect! ^^ <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs ♪Be prepared...♪  15:46, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

On his warrior, the white chest goes right up to his throat. Change yours to match please ^^ 19:52, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? 19:48, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded yeah, sorry bout that. Bah, stupid computer lost all the layers.. Oh, and Oblivion, I dont really think the throat as an "underside" cause it said his underside was white. I shoulda been alittle like this:[] I wanted to say this while you were redoing his warrior, but I forgot to. Heh, oops. 23:12, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink 04:28, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Technically, it still is an underside. I'd rather you change this than I have to change both his warrior and deputy. It doesn't matter how far up it goes as long as it's still on his belly, which it is. 18:30, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Bloo? <span style="">01:47 Sun Jan 29

yeah, I'll just upload it when I get back from school 15:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt. Ki) ~For approval
Hi! Like my charart? I made it pretty quickly =)

On the "characters needing art" page it said they needed a bracken alt, which might mean the alternate kit version, but I'm not sure so I'll post this anyways. 18:08, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

This isn't bracken colored. In fact, it looks exactly like his current kit image... 18:13, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I know it looks like his current kit image, but I made it on photoshop (I didn't copy it). I wasn't sure what the "bracken" meant. I'll make it lighter momentarily. 20:41, January 20,2012 (UTC)

It's a...thumbnail, I think? Change it pleeeease. 23:38, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I know I am not a part of the project, but if you don't know what "bracken colored" means, then you shouldn't do that charart.

Dethumbed. Rename the file Oakheart.kit.alt.png. Bracken colored is along the lines of this: If you use photoshop, use the eye-dropped tool to pick a color and use that as your base color. 00:21, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on his face and tail. You might want to fix it. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  13:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Light source looks a little bit, confused ,18:37,January 21,2012 (UTC)

I know what bracken looks like! I just wasn't sure what they meant by bracken on the characters needing art page. I'm going to use the colours from the alternate warrior version so that it looks the same. I'll also fix the lines around the muzzle and tail ASAP. 22:01, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 10:05, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

...Any more comments? -- 20:02, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

You should save it as a .png, not a .jpg, so the background will be transparent and there won't be waste pixels around the image. 02:10, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

It has to be png for more reasons than just that, so yes, change that. And rename this Oakheart.kit.alt.png. Also, be a bit more patient. Don't ask for comments unless you've been waiting a day or two and nobody's CBA'd or commented on it. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale  Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  23:58, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry; I'm just kind of an impatient person. Re-uploaded 00:52, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Minorly fixed heading, it still looks really pixely. 04:22, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, that's cayse it was saved as a jpg at first. I'm sorry, but there's not much way to fix that without redoing, so I think that's what you'll have to do. Sorry. 16:14, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Oh...great. That's ok though I guess, since I can do solids really quickly. I'll re-upload it ASAP 21:02, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:07, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Look here for shading placement. Right now I can't tell where your light source is. <span style="">02:36 Fri Jan 27

Are you still working on this? 03:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but two weeks isn't over yet. -- 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean exactly? You've got one week before a chararts declined, it's been 6 days. Just cause you have that long til you can reupload doesn't mean you should take the whole time. If you're still working on this, reupload it then. This will be declined if it's not uploaded by tomorrow. 18:00, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 00:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Have you looked at the shading placement? It still is lacking. <span style="">04:52 Thu Feb 2

Birdpaw(A)~For Approval


Its not great but i tried i know the earpinks bad im tryin to fix it so that doesnt need comments about ear pink ill fix it so any other comments? 22:12, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png, lighten the shading, colorpick the earpink and scar off the kittypet image, and perhaps blur the shading. 22:13, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I use pixlr what is colorpick? 22:19, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Colorpicking is when you open the other image found on their page on the editor and use the eyedropper tool to get the color from the image. 22:21, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

oh thanks 22:25, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the ear pink was hard to change because it wasnt saved under layered before thats why its bad 22:41, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure that chararts should be saved as a .jpg...They are normally saved as a .png. Also, the file name is still...wrong. The A in apprentice shouldn't be capitalized. Blur and lighten the shading. 22:47, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Chararts shouldn't be saved as jpg, otherwise they pixelate. You might have to redo and save as a png. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue" >Sky- <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="blue">Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 23:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i know yet again the earpink is terrible so please dont comment on that and i lightened and blurred the shading 00:36, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar...Looking nice. 00:39, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

thanks and i dont know why the box is around it its a png 00:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Something worng my comp. wont let me blur or smudge anything anymore what do i do? 00:44, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded now its working i blurred it 00:48, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, You need to make the background transparent not white. 01:12, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

this is png i dont know why its like that 01:19, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

No it's probably because you didn't make it transparent. I know your work with pixlr, so just take the wand tool and go over the background. ^^ 01:23, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the scar and define the shading. 03:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black. 03:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

ok not really sure what you mean cinder what exactley do i do with the wand tool do i delete the background? what layer do i delete it on? 17:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

My comp. isnt working well so i cant really blur alot so i might take a while to reupload 17:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

and i know i seem stupid but im bad at blurring ear pink so how exactley do i do it and make it good 18:03, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded i know the background im workin with it to make it transparent 18:21, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks to teldy for telling me how to make it clear on the background thanks teldy! 18:55, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Remember to upload over the old file when reuploading. Don't make a whole new file. Rename this Birdpaw.apprentice.png and either brighten the highlights of lighten the base coat. <span style="border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:#4b3b6a; font-family:Cursive; background:#bdcdff; text-shadow:gray 0.3em 0.3em 0.15em;"> Pale Legs   ♪Be prepared...♪  19:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar less red. 21:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded the scar is the same color as the earpink now and i added highlights to make the shading "pop" 21:32, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights <span style="">00:11 Sun Jan 22

Re-uploaded the highlights are as bright as the'll get-- 00:59, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. 01:08, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar and can you darken the nose pink just a tad? And I think there is blurred ear lineart, but I can't tell.. >.<  14:35, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

She looks like you just filled her in with black! Add highlights or something. 16:42, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

She does have highlights and there as light as i can get them and her nose is black so i cant darken it-- 17:34, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Add another layer of highlights, perhaps? 17:35, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded i added another ;ayer of highlites.-- 18:07, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's a speck of watse by the tip of the tail.<font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Watchu want? 02:59, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

where do you see the waste sky not bieng sarcastic i just need to know where it is so i can get rid of it-- 22:26, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The ear on <-- side doesn't look completely filled in. 01:30, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded it was overfilled.-- 23:50, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her up a tiny bit. 14:37, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

ok-- 22:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded-- 00:28, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her up some more? I can barely make out the lineart. 03:01, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

i might be able to re-upload it today but probabley tommorow-- 14:53, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar less hot-pink please. <span style="">00:01 Mon Jan 30

There is a waste near the back legs 18:03, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the scar is the same color as the one on her kittypet image and the fur is lightened-- 00:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit more. <span style="">01:42, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Webfoot (A) ~ Withdrawn
Fallow's reservation ran out, so I snatched this up. According to the category page, this is the last apprentice image needing to be redone (but there could be more without categories). Woo! Comments? 15:36, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps make the stripes fade out a bit more like the elder and I believe the nose should be grey. Brilliant job like always, Shellheart. 00:17, January 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * I did this to match his warrior image, as the elder image is on the redo list. 00:51, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The elder image shouldn't be on the redo list, the warrior is getting tweaked by simply putting shorthair lineart over the old image, so the elder one doesn't need to be redone. I'm removing it now, so could you make this match the elder now? 05:00, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I was the one who was supposed to do that, I forgot to post it XD Problem solved. 05:06, January 28, 2012 (UTC)


 * Aww, dang it. The warrior image looked so much better than the elder image. (sigh) Fine, I'll do it. 15:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, someone else can take over. I just don't have it in me to copy that pattern when I like this one so much. 20:24, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can i steal this back? <font face="Segeo Script"> ~Pouncey!  <font face="Segeo Script"><font color="#ee1289">"Aloha!" "You're  Hawaiian?" <font color="#ee1289">"No..." <font color="#ee1289"> x3 20:28, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 20:46, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow (KP) ~ For Approval
She ate from the twoleg an' everyone else got one... Comments? <span style="">02:19 Sat Jan 28

Can you make that curve in the neck like this: ( where the tag was. 02:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back a little. 02:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading too, nice job! 06:09, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose color. 08:07, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">18:38 Sat Jan 28

The lineart for the neck looks a little bit too fat/blotchy. Try copying it from Nettlesplashs or Honeypaws. 19:53, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing, I don't feel like fiddling around with lineart. It never works out. Anyone who wants it, take it :P. <span style="">23:30 Sat Jan 28

I'll take it. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  01:19, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. <span style="">02:27, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

Darken the shadings please 17:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thin out the lineart out on the ---> side of her neck. 20:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg. 14:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg and the back a bit more. -- 02:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the shading to my liking. 12:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. 14:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. <span style="">00:05 Thu Feb 2

Smallear (A) - For Approval
He was mention as an apprentice when he got his nick in his ear. Comments? 04:59, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading/lighting looks to be a bit blotchy. And did you shrink his ears? I can't tell, and his elder image has them shrunk rather significantly. 15:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

On the the fron right paw, is that a lighter part? Cause it looks like a lighter paw. Tone it down or blur it or something? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 21:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 02:12, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Scarlet, but could you blur the shading a bunch? And make sure it's all the same darkness. <span style="">03:08 Thu Feb 2

Re-uploaded. Four words: I HATE THIS CHARART! 04:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Lo) - For Approval
Mhm, so happy I have weeks off! 2nd loner! (Worst charart I've ever made >.<) Comments? <span style="">16:10 Mon Jan 30

Erm, I'd say actually upload the file first... 16:11, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I accidently spelled the file name wrong. I uploaded it correctly now. <span style="">16:23 Mon Jan 30

Blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:34, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Actually, I like this one. :3 <span style="">23:16 Mon Jan 30

The eye looks a bit wierd... Outline the white pixel in black. -- 02:18, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eye looks fine, but, that's my opinion. ^^ 02:20, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. The eyes are fine to me too. <span style="">03:06, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-uploaded. Eyes are artists choice hun. <span style="">16:10 Wed Feb 1

Brook (Lo)~For Approval
Here she is. My first Charart in a long time. Comments? 17:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Whole image lineart is blurred, redone it please ,17:43,January 30,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to do it without redoing the image totally. 17:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little? And on chat last night, we agreed Brook should be either tweaked or redone becase she needs more stripes on her body. On her back leh leg and face especially. Would you be fine with doing that? :) Great work by the way 18:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the lineart's blurred too. 19:23, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The ear-pink is in the wrong side of the ear where we can see it (edit conflicts! How dare it!) 19:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, that was me with the conflicts. Changes not showing. I think the earpink should be forward. Just looks more natural to me. 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and thicken the lineart one pixel at the torn ear. 04:03, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Please say what parts need to be blurred. That would really help. 15:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Try matching the stripes with the warrior version, as in, less smudging, and thicker stripes. Also make the shading more noticable while not overdoing it. So far, nice work! 00:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Atelda, I told her she could change the stripes because on chat we agreed Brook needed more stripes. 02:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you have the smudging go in the direction of her fur a little more and darken the shading? 03:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I love swirled tabbies, which is why I chose this design. Changes not showing. 15:36, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

The fur smudging still isn't going in the direction of the fur. And this actually has less stripes than the other images, so add more. They also look kinda unnatural, like they're paintbrush strokes, not stripes. And try looking at a reference of a swirled tabby to make it more realistic. And if her stripes are gonna be redone anyways, there's no need to keep the color of the other images, so can you make the base coat less ginger? 17:57, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:30, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner, smudge them, and change the color of the main pelt color and stripes to brown. Right now it looks red. 00:56, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Fleck (Lo) - CBA
Ok since people liked that I made Fleck a classic tabby last time, I kept that. Though...eeeeeesh, I really don't like how I interpreted the pattern. I'm not gonna sit here and harp on how much I hate it, I'm just going to politely ask fr pointers on how to perfect my classic tabby pattern for him. That is my main concern 18:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Try adding some stripes to the back of his flank. Just my preference. 19:03, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make him oranger? He looks golden brown right now. 20:44, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I took the ginger off of the pelt and earpink chart located on the apprentice tutorials page, so if that color is mistaken then it needs to be changed 22:04, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded after looking the image over I realized that the color was indeed wrong 03:55, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink. This colour is perfect. 04:01, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ 04:04, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

This is so pretty <3 Can you add some more stripes to the base of the tail and the left side of the haunch? 04:10, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Agh I should have reuploaded this sooner so it could've got CBA'd and I could get Yellowfang, darn you Shelly XD 04:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Ivy, this is amazing! Comments before approval? 00:54, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Hussar (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner image and first image for approval made on GIMP. I love GIMP now though. Any way, here he is! Comments? 19:19, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and tone down the highlights. Excellent! 19:21, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I swear, one more edit conflict and i shall lose it. Any way, i gave him the wrong eye color (don't ask how) So I fixed that also. Comments? 19:35, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. This is lovely daddy! <span style="">19:41 Mon Jan 30

Re-uploaded.   I have been discovered! Oh noes! Pshaw, comments? 19:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar some more and make it the same colour as the earpink. 20:50, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Nyeh, scar. Your lucky i have the .xcf file Comments? 21:00, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:31, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Pshaw, shading is annoying right now. Any way, comments? 22:33, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more... 18:27, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar stand out. I also don't think it should be so shoop da whoopy. Make it straighter :3 19:16, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the scar. 00:27, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Not half bad, Rain. This is looking excellent. 19:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mist (Lo) (Lo) ~ For Approval
First loner image! I'm in love with this <333 &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Oakbreeze/Sig}} 19:34, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are spotz not colored in and can you blur the ear-pink more and add depth to the eyes and define the shading more? 19:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this File:Mist (Lo).loner.png, please. =) It looks good~ 20:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink. I think Mist was my second ever charart! *good times* <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 21:30, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There are a couple stray white pixles on the belly, the tail, the elbow and the hind leg 00:19, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

As this is a kit doing this image, I changed the heading. <span style="">03:04, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Well done Oakbreeze! This seems 85% complete to me...I will add you in as an apprentice now, and since I've evaluated this, this is now Up For Approval. 03:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thunder (Lo) - For Approval
Well, Im bit suprised, I was been thinking that all loners are almost reserved o.O suprise!..Hmm i tried match the stripes best..but failed.. ,20:33,January 30,2012 (UTC)

Love this! Amazing! The only thing I can think of is to define the earpink. <span style="">20:49 Mon Jan 30

Make the eyes the same colour as the leader. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:38, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,15:18,January 31,2012 (UTC)

I don't see a pupil, and he'll need that in order to see. Just saying. 16:00, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

hmm reuploaded ,16:40,January 31,2012 (UTC)

Blur the body shading that's by the closest hind leg. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  07:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,18:04,February 1,2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit ;) Really nice job Leafy! 00:20, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) - For Approval
Comments? Elo legs 20:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the legs just a tad? 21:15, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. 00:26, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">03:00 Thu Feb 2

Ravenpaw (Lo) - For Approval
Now I might get flamed for this, but I think that the loner blanks look a little chubby... Anyways, I was surprised no one had reserved Ravenpaw yet. Comments? 20:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink...? 20:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:06, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Well you should have interrupted CBA to say that. Oh well. Define the shading on the legs furthest away, especially where the torso would cast shadows on the areas closest to the body 22:17, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't, because I only realized now. 22:37, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Two things, one this is beautiful just define the 'highlights' and two I have a neighborhood cat that looks just like this minus the tail tip. 00:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mudge th epelt into the earpink. 00:25, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Wind (Lo) ~ For Approval
I really wanted one of the leaders.. xD Well, heres Wind! I got all the colors off of her leader image, so I don't want to hear anything about that. :3 I don't think changes are showing yet. 20:53, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit. 20:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the shading. 21:13, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit now x3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 21:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Knew that one was coming xD Blurred the shading. :3 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a little? 23:40, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. >.< 22:30, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Where exactly is your light source? The shading on her right hind leg looks like it's coming from behind, and the front legs looks like the light's coming from in front. Can you settle on one? :3 04:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Looking good, Misty! 19:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading. I'll fix the light source later. >.< Thanks Cloudy! :D  21:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderstar (Lo) - For Approval
Spiderstar!! <3 He was my very first charart :3 Sweetflower, I'm sorry for stealing him, but I just had to c: 20:57, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's ok :P You did most of the work anyways. Lighten the shading a bit. <span style="">21:08 Mon Jan 30

Re-uploaded. 00:03, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

You got the earpink on the wrong side of the ear xD 00:28, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

No I don't :3 The ear could either be facing towards us or to the front of the cat. 00:31, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Pfffft. I knew that. >_> 00:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sure ya did xD Perhaps add another stripe on the haunch? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:49, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sure, why not? :3 01:04, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing a bit? It's much darker than the leader image. And add or define the depth in the eyes. This is lovely. ^^ 07:27, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Barley (Lo) ~ For Approval
Hmm.. Not one of my favorite chararts, but one of my favorite characters. c: 21:09, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

3: such a beauty I think you're only allowed to have one charart up for approval at a time... (maybe wrong) 21:17, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

She's right. Only one loner image per person. Either this or Wind will have to be declined. 21:26, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

So sorry. Can I decline this one? 22:09, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for being so co-operative. I'll list it as withdrawn so anyone can take over if they want. 22:15, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over! 8D 00:25, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think I know who Oblivion was directing that to...  Define the highlights. 20:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid it completely so I'd have the layers. I'm not sure if the changes are showing.... I tried my best to get the white well shaded without making it gray. 07:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Crowfeather (Lo) - For Approval
I'm back, and ready to make this part of the ultimate Twi shipping (lol don't ask. :P) as a loner. xD Comments? 21:15, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

This is bootyful Twi *u* Blur the earpink. 00:06, January 31, 2012 (UTC)
 * U* Crowfeather!! Blur the shading please? ^^ 21:17, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him a bit so he doesn't look black. 20:48, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Actually *just stating* I got the color from the apprentice .xcf. I can change it if someone else agrees. 21:26, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, it's fine. He's stated as almost black, and if his color is from his apprentice's xcf, you're fine. Could you just tone down the earpink a bit? 00:40, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cinders (Lo) ~ For Approval
I love Cinders, comments? 21:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? Loverly. 21:58, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:01, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the transitions between the patches. 22:07, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:49, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the one on the belly so it's more consistent. 03:52, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could you defne the earpink? I can barely see it. 16:45, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It might be your computer Bluestar. 21:25, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ For Approval
Whooo. First loner. And I snagged Mapleshade. ^^ Breeze  whisker  22:07, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Eww, I hate Mapleshade herself. Tone down the ginger parts so they match her other images. 22:10, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a scar across thr bridge of her nose? Great job Breeze, you never cease to impress me. 22:14, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. Sorry about the retarded scars o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 00:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the ginger and stripes to match the other images. I wanted to do this one. =3 06:02, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I'm taking a while to edit. ^^; I'll try to reupload tomorrow. Breeze whisker  04:28, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Piper (Lo) ~ CBA
Hey! Don't start the party without me >8D Comments? 23:38, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. My. Goodness. I'm so speechless. This is beautiful, Mounty! Just darken the shading a little bit :3 23:44, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, I can do better. I think you should remove the stripes from the white, it isn't possible to have stripes on the white, and can cats' stripes be lighter than the base colour...? 23:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded 8DD Thank you so much Oblivion! I think the stirpes look fine. 23:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

.... Any whoo! I <333 this! 8D Blur where the pelt meets the earpink. 23:55, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot of waste by the chin. Beautiful! 23:56, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aww Thanks so much you guys 8DDD 00:04, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Holy freakin Jesus Christ FFFFuu- You're even better than me D8 Okay, if you can't remove the stripes from the white then smudge the into it so they kinda fade..? 00:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, actually stripes can be on the white, I think I remember a discussion about it. Well I think this is one of the best chararts I've ever seen and I'm so jealous (totally wants to steal this pattern for Fleck) 00:27, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad. Bootiful <3  Elo legs 01:47, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you guys so much ^^ 02:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Erm now that I look at it, I can't really see the smaller stripes. I'm really, really sorry. 02:53, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Ooow this is...so beautiful! Can you blur the ear pink into the fur a tad please? I love that fur pattern! ,15:21,January 31,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much Leafy 8D 00:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I love this <3 Should the two gray legs have white paws? 00:08, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thankies Rowan ^^ The legs are white they just have shading on them. 00:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Could make the shading on the back legs lighter and then add some depth? Looks great. 00:21, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great! I'd still make the back legs lighter; they look gray with no shading. 00:30, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks you guys so much <3 00:47, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

<3333333 this epic image, so good! 8D Anyways Blur/lighten the shading on the white if you can. <span style="">02:59, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Re-uploaded Thank you so much DJ 8DD 03:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Dear StarClan, this is beautiful! Anyways, it looks like there's a small line of white on the back leg. I don't know if it's shading that was lightened too much, or if there's no shading all together. 19:01, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you so much Cloudy 8DDD I think I fixed it. 22:35, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know how Moonleaf thinks they could do better... Anyways, I would make the stripes on the white parts lighter. -- 00:13, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine. 00:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I feel like I do wrong...CBA? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  00:47, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (Lo) ~ For Approval
This is uggy Dx Comments? 23:57, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's lovely :3 Define the ear pink. 00:00, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. Excellent ^^ 00:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. >:D 00:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Psssh. This ain't uggy XP Define the earpink. 03:32, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Aww, thanks Mounty <3 20:20, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

River (Leader) (Lo) ~ For Approval
Woot! Enjoy~ 00:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Epic~ Make him a tad more silvery. 00:51, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I made him a bit lighter, as all colors are taken from his leader. 10:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 14:41, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Move the ear pink :3 21:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine, they go either way. 00:17, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I changed it anyway. 01:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 03:54, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the body shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 04:58, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Chirp (Lo) - CBA
Ugh. There's something weird about this image. Comments? <span style="">03:28 Tue Jan 31

Just blur the stripes a teensy bit more and you're good to go  03:40, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 <span style="">03:52 Tue Jan 31

Blur the body shading. Pretty. ;D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  06:37, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bleh. <span style="">06:19 Wed Feb 1

I'm gonna try this...CBA? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  00:45, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Speckletail (Lo) ~ For Approval
Certainly not one of my favorites. Comments? 06:31, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes and make them more wavy. 16:10, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to while doing my best to match the old loner image. 03:13, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit lighter. ^^ <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk  03:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo)~For Approval
Daisy's loner image. My first charart. Comments?

I de-thumbed it for you, remove all the waste and rename it File:Daisy.loner.png, or just upload it ove rthe old file. 20:59, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Also, make it transparent. 21:01, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

And move the ear pink over. 21:48, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

And the image is kinda pixelated. 21:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be me, but I can hardly see the shading. 22:47, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

@Silvah, the ear-pink can be on either side. 22:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Change it to a png image. <span style="">02:42, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

You'll have to redo the image, I think. Because of the file format, it's made the lineart look slightly blurred and the overall image is somewhat pixely. 18:58, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Egg (Lo) ~ For Approval
Changes not showing yet, first loner <3 Comments? 23:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Now showing. 23:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Nice <3 take the color from his apprentice and lighten the shading. 23:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I took all the colors from his apprentice, Rowan =3 23:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading more. I think with the light source there shouldn't be a light part on the tail either. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 23:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The color doesn't really seem to match. 23:23, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and smudge the earpink. 02:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

If you used black for the shading, maybe use a darker colour of his base pelt colour. ^^ ,,

Make the eyes have more depth. Lovely otherwise~ 05:03, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) ~ For Approval
The ear needed to be torn since he was a loner when he was decribed with it. Comments? 01:11, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripe a small bit? 01:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, as well. 04:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You're not allowed to have to chararts up at once anymore. You're gonna have to withdraw one of them. If you keep this one, darken the shading. 07:44, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Floss (Lo) - For Approval
I <3 this charart. Comments? <span style="">02:39, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Define the overall shading. Lovely. <3 -- 04:08, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the gray on the shoulder. Good work! 02:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and there is waste around the image. 03:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  <span style="">06:05, Thu, Feb, 2, 2012

Woody (Lo) ~ For Approval
This is the correct title? It is from what I saw in the guidelines... First charart...;3; I know it's not that good...comments?? 03:37, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Very good. 90% complete, thus changing this to "For Approval", as I have evaluated, and Willowfern will now become an apprentice. 03:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

His description says he's shaggy. Can you add some lineart on the fur like Yellowfang's image? 03:47, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Of course. Also, thank you, Stoneclaw. :) Reuploaded 03:56, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some. Good first image! 05:39, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivyheart. :) Reuploaded 02:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eye, again, this is amazing @Willowfern! Possibly add shaggy parts to the legs and/or legs. 02:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Once again, thanks Stoneclaw. :) Reuploaded 02:20, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) ~ For Approval
Here he is...Ugh. Comments? 03:38, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Psh. This is absolutely gorgeous. <3 Can you define the tail shading. 03:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't he have a torn ear? Or did he get that later on? 16:43, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

He was described with it in Rising Storm, so I believe that was after he was a loner.... So I don't think he would, but if he was a loner after that, correct me if I'm wrong. Anyways, thin out the stripes a ton to match the other images. 17:52, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Leafpool (Lo) - For Approval
Meh... I don't like this one that much... 03:43, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job! Can you lighten the brown a tad? 05:24, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Leggy! :) 14:55, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

That was Ivy, not Leggy. XD But can you lighten the stripes and make the earpink stand out more? 17:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Haha XP Sorry Ivy! 23:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

No problem! This legolution stuff can be confusing. XD Definet the tail shading a little more. 02:14, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken all ze shading. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 02:21, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:04, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Fritz (PO3) (Lo) ~ For Approval
I based the pattern after a loved one, so, I'd rather not change it. :3 03:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the body by the closest back leg. <3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin 04:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <3 04:31, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Daww. <3 One side of the torn ear looks a little too thin and spiky. 03:15, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:32, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Lo) ~ For Approval
Yay, I get to do another Yellowfang image! Comments? 04:33, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I love this cat. XD Can you define the shading a little more? :3 04:34, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Gosh dangit I was going to do this :P Lighten her tail some. 04:35, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Gotta be faster, Ivy! 15:50, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Jingo (Lo)- For approval
Jingo (again). Woo! Comments? 00:05, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

8O Y u so good Teldy *is jelly* Define the shoulder shading. 01:16, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Crop the image :3 Beautiful. <span style="">02:56 Thu Feb 2