Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

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Mousefur (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
She was shown to be a light brown in The Darkest Hour, so Comments? 13:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Lighten it up and blur the shadin. Skt Like a baws  13:38, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color a bit more. 15:10, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

A lot more actually. This is in no way light, it's the same color as her main image. Also desaturate the earpink and thicken the shading on her neck/shoulder. 15:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png.

Reuploaded 20:24, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Nice, Moonshine<3 Blur the earpink and shading a bit and rename it File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png Just take away one .png. 20:29, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just a tip from an old coot. ;) I advise, with lighter cats, adding a second layer of shading where the shadows would be darkest, like at the base of her tail, back of her head, behind her front legs, etc. It gives the charart a more three-dimensional look and feel that might help out a bit. 20:37, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I changed the heading, since Mousefur already has an alt warrior. This is the second alt.

This should be called File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png. No need for the extra .png. Blur the earpink and shrink it. 00:01, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 06:20, 31, 05, 2012

Define the neck and haunch shading. 08:26, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" on the face and tail. 05:45 Sat Jun 2

Shrink the ear pink and make it more triangular.

Moon was having issues, so I uploaded for her. 18:11, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, blur it, and center it in the ear. 19:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:31, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, it's very sharp-edged. 22:27, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Toadstep (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
Finally an original image! *dances* If Graystripe gets a black one, then Toadstep gets a gray. Comments? 00:34, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and eye color? Cute! =3  00:36, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Eye color's from the main image, not changing it. 00:54, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs. Skt Like a baws  13:03, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh, you still working on this?

Harespring (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
He was described as a light brown tom in We Need to Talk. This isn't a partial, since it goes against his normal brown and white description, and characters have gotten alts for less.

Blur the shading some. 21:26, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

If I blur it, you're not going to be able to see it. I think it's fine.

No, don't blur it just maybe lighten the shading in his rump a tad. 12:57, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's fine. But I'm sorry, I have to agree with blurring the shading a bit.... at least on the haunch. 14:05, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Blur that haunch shading a smidge and define the tail shading a tad. Skt Like a baws  07:17, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. I also tweaked the color a bit... still looks a little iffy though..

Runningnose (Alt. MC) - For Approval
Tried a new shading technique for him <3 02:38, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Purdy =3 Define the shading a tad? 02:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:06, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

To be honest, the patches look...well...not blotchy. I don't really know how to explain it. I think that maybe if you used a harder-edged smudge tool and got a few points to each patch to match the lay of the fur, it would make it look more realistic. 03:40, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry... I don't quite know what you're asking of me. 16:02, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

I think she's saying that the patches don't look quite realistic, to take the hard-edge tool, and and smudge the pathces a bit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:10, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe blur the areas where the patches join the other patches a tiny bit? Otherwise I honestly think they look fine. -- 08:35, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:09, June 4, 2012 (UTC)