Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 20

Tadpole (Ki)- Temporarily Declined
So this is my first cat up for approval. Any suggestions?--QuailflightTheCat 00:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Good job for your first charart! But the lineart seems kind of blurred... try doing it again with this blank: The shading looks great though! -- ★ Bat wing ☽  ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:54, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. That's probably my horrible shading. 8)--Quail 01:01, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

No, the shading's great! Tell me if you need any help with it. I'm fairly good at black cats. And you've took on a hard one for your first charart! Black and white cats are the hardest to shade - trust me, I know! Snowfur was my first cat! -- ★ Bat wing ☽  ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I know too. Before it switched to Kestrelflight, that section was Hollyleaf-who I'm thinking of reposting. Snowfern Snow!

Thanks, Batwing. I'm going to re-upload it, and make sure it looks better. I didn't use any highlighting, oh yeah, something's wrong with my siggy! :( 8|--Quail! Meow! 01:53, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, I re did it. Hopefully this is a little better.--Quail! Meow! 03:00, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, I think Blackclaw had this reserved first, but I'm not positive. I'll check the history--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:22, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually Quail, I don't even see your siggie on the current project list. Did you even reserve Tadpole?--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I did. At the bottom. Sorry for any problem, Snowfall. --Quail! Meow! 03:31, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Well it looks as if Blackclaw reserved Tadpole under the status as a rogue, however Tadpole was seen as a rogue kitten. You may have reserved him later on under the right blank I believe, but Blackclaw did reserve Tadpole first even if it wasn't under the right status. I'm not a senior warrior anymore so I think we might have to ask Sandy or Bramble about this...or maybe Blackclaw will let you keep the image up.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:55, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm....I didn't see Blackclaw's name on the reserve list, and no Tadpole, it should be okay.--Quail! Meow! 04:02, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, you only reserved Tadpole after I told you you weren't on the list. Anyway, Shimmerpool's right. Ask Bramble, Sandy, or Blackclaw--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:04, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blackclaw is under a different name as they changed their for the holidays. It is Rainwhisker and the 6th user on the page. Check for yourself and click the link and it will take you to Blackclaw's page. I for one only have to hover over a person's name to see what userpage it will take me too.-- ♪Shimmer  pool♫  06:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Ki)- Temporarily Declined


He was cuter and nicer as a kit.-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 03:27, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oooh, it's nice! But blur the shading some more, and blur the gray on his legs--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:28, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed the gray on his legs. Is it better that way or the other way?-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 03:44, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

That looks great! But his white tipped tail looks too gray. Make it more pale--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:09, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I made the tail tip paler-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 04:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome Nightshine! I have nothing more to say however. It's so good! --Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:28, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 04:48, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I thought I already reserved this? Evanphoto 12:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

star that shines on water (star) - Temporarily Declined


the poor cat who sharptooth killed..comments??-- *Ivy  spring!!*  05:32, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

It needs more earpink.--Echoheart 12:29, January 4, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

Blur the shading on the top of her head. --Icestorm HI! 13:07, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

She's very good, but her highlights need to be blurred some more. I love the color! :o Hawkey C'mon 2010! 14:52, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

She needs mudsteaks. -- ★ Bat wing ☽  ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Violet (R)- Temporarily Declined
Guess who's back? Don't ask why I'm on here today. Anyway, I couldn't see this image go into waist so comments? Hawkey C'mon 2010! 14:59, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...it still looks more yellow than orange, but using the sponge tool on saturate a couple of times should fix that. ;) Also, the ear pink needs blurred some more. Otherwise, this looks really awesome. :D --  Icy -chan  15:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploadedeh! Mwar the highlights look yellow now! T.T Oh well, she looks oranger. :) Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yah, looks awesome. The only thing I can see now is that I can barely see the ear pink, make it more of a reddish color. Also, I think I see blurred lineart in a couple of spots near the lineart in the highlights. --  Icy -chan  15:20, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bit wider, and it should be good. --  Icy -chan  15:34, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:50, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * I still think she is a little to bright.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  20:33, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more ginger-orange. -- ★ Bat wing ☽  ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:18, January 4, 2010 (UTC)