Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 59

Sweetbriar ~ Silver Nomination
I tried to expand as much history as possible. Comments? 07:04, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add a quote of Bluekit mentioning her? (sorry, new here >.<) Mi  st  y!  07:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes add all the quotes that relate to her (I think there's two: the one mentioned above and the one where Pinestar is talking about his first battle.) Also, see if you can smooth out the first paragraph of BP. 10:13, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Done everything. 06:37, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good! I would skim through Bluestar's Prophecy to make sure that you mentioned every time she was in the books. Also, Mistypebble; Don't be afraid to express your opinion. ;) 06:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The first paragraph of her article is very terse and choppy so I would make it flow better. 14:03, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Also fixed up some references. 06:41, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? 02:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

It probably is there just haven't been any critiques. Looks good, Robintalon. This will be CBVed when more votes close. 18:21, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay cool 05:14, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to put this up for vote momentarily as this has had no critiques since the 3rd. 01:15, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 01:42, September 20, 2011 (UTC)