Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=For Approval= Take it to the approval page

=Tweaking=

Spiderstar (Star) ~ Redone
OA is Splook I believe, redone for being a Y tabby. Honestly not very happy with this and might make some tweaks.

There's some waste floating around him.Potato&#61;) (talk) 02:32, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

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?^^ Define shading depth.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:08, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

I believe his chest should be a form of paler brown not ginger and this seems a bit ginger to me. 08:29, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

I dunno, a lot of tabbies have these orangeish chests/legs. I used this image as a reference and color picked from it. Though if others agree, I'll change it.

I meam, when I've do e brown tabbies I've always been told it had to be a paler version of the color if I were to add it. 08:40, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

May I get a second opinion, though? Some other tabbies on the site, like Reedclaw and Flykit's brown version had the same orange-y chests.

Eh, considering the reference seems perfectly good, I see no reason you should have to change it (side note: I wonder if that's the type of cat that the erins imagined when they made robinwing...). But could you maybe darken the base just a touch? It seems just a little bit light for a tabby that's specifically described as dark.

Re-uploaded I thought about that too

Spiderstar (Lo) ~ Redone
eh

There's some waste floating around him.Potato=) (talk) 02:32, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i honestly could only find one pixel

The starclan seems to have more stripes 19:12, 02/19/2019

Define the earpink.Potato&#61;) (talk) 23:07, February 19, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

^same as his star 08:29, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

Mistystar (A) - Tweaked
OA is me, tweaked the color to match better and also tweaked her shading while I was at it.

The shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart a touch on the belly, might that be fixed while it’s up?

That was actually intentional bounce light, but I can remove it if anyone else also thinks I should.

i personally think its ok, although could you smooth out the shading on the haunch slightly? 03:52, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Where specifically? The highlights? Other than those, I'm not seeing any spots that look uneven or hard edged, so if you could be more detailed or give me a redline that'd be great.

Sorreltail (Star Alt) ~ Redone
okay, redid her tabby markings and darkened them but kept the shading the same. Comments? 21:40, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste outside the ear. 02:13, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing it, not to sound rude but it seems a bit nitpicky since I didn't even draw near the ear. If nobody else comments on it I'll fix it after the approval as I don't see just re-upping on something so minor and something that isn't noticed unless you zoom in. 03:43, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Q) ~ Tweaked
Oa was Max. Tweaked to remove ragged fur. 23:48, February 20, 2019 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Scarlet. Tweaked to remove ragged fur and darken stripe. 01:13, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Found some waste floating around her. 04:14, February 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reups If you could specify where next time, that'd be much appreciated :) 04:34, February 21, 2019 (UTC)