Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 139

Clawface (DF) - Approved
I cannot match the scars for the life of me >< any help with it? 00:53, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's supposed to be battle-scarred, I think he could use a few more scars, wouldn't you agree?

Reupload I've also fixed the scars they are much better. 02:10, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit and add pink to the paw pads 02:53, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I looked up on paw pad colours, and if we just assume he is a mixed breed, darker coloured cats typically have gray/black paws, while lighter cats have pink. It can be a mix of grey/black with pink. I think Clawface is okay with his paw pad but if anyone thinks otherwise, I can lighten it and/or add a little pink. 04:30, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the scars. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 12:41, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading more and blur it or whatever on the back and tail. 12:57, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload So any snarling kitties! 00:44, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

You left the inside of the mouth white, and colored the front teeth the same color as the tongue. Could you make the teeth white/pale and the inside of the mouth a darker shade of the tongue? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:51, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the scars, please. I can only see two of them. 16:46, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the back shading just a little more. Define the tail tip shading as well. 23:53, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 06:54, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front right leg, if there is any. Might just be my computer though. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 02:15, June 17, 2015 (UTC)

The facial shading suggests light is coming from the right, so I'm rolling with that: remove all shading along the back and top of the tail (lined up with the back), cover the rest of the tail entirely in shadow, add shading along the belly, and add some directly behind the head, because it's connected to the body. Nice job though! 02:11, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I defined the front leg shading. The shading placement is to the right, not top right. I'd rather redo the face shading then the rest of the body shading. I've added a bit of shading around the back leg. 22:15, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't mean for it to be coming from the top right; my comment is for the right side, which the facial shading suggests. Top right or whole right side, the entire back should be in light, and it doesn't change much, if anything at all on the pose of these blanks. 22:17, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

I do not see why I have to remove the back shading. I'd like a second opinion please. 22:22, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Erm, Leggy was one of our best artists, Stealth. She used to be a PCA lead a long time ago, so I think she knows what she's talking about.. The shading on the back contradicts the rest of the source. I know when I shaded Darkstripe, I imagined they were the loner blanks (as they use the same basic source), and used what I would have done on that blank for these. I agree with Leggy and I think you should probably remove that shading.

Since you don't understand, here's a diagram of what I'm trying to explain. Light coming from the right side would hit objects that bulge out, and objects that bulge out with thus create shadows on anything behind it. There's nothing blocking the back from light exposure with your light source. Meanwhile, the entire body covers the tail, so it would be in shadow, (although leave some areas of even darker shading on the edges to show it's still a round object). 22:38, June 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks for that Leggy! I've redone all the shading except his right legs and a little on his side. 03:44, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the front legs. 13:01, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 23:00, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.

Tigerstar (DF) - Approved
sigh 09:56, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Try removing the eyelashes. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 12:42, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Is this a female blank? Storm &#9835;  12:56, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

You kinda just repeated what Silvercloud said... also, there's waste in between the tail and leg lineart.

Re-uploaded Female Tigerstar? lmao 14:24, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Make the mouth darker than the tongue. They have the same color. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 14:29, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please try to clarify that? Because i don't really get where you mean by "the mouth" on this blank. 14:36, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

http://i.imgur.com/1qFSyuF.png If you can not see it, try downloading the image. Look inside of the red circle. It is the spot you should darken. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 14:51, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

I think she means do something like this with the mouth, where it's different colors. I took the idea for that from Jayie's previously uploaded file that had examples for the blanks. I only give a zoomed in link because damn those are small. yes, that is my OC

Please add a scar going across the muzzle, as that's what's depicted in his leader charat. User: Dewdrops56/talk 15:02, June, 13, 2015

Blur/smudge the tail shading. 23:40, June 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope I fixed what everyone suggested. If I forgot to fix something please tell me 04:17, June 14, 2015 (UTC)

You forgot the rip in his ear Storm  &#9835;  14:25, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

My bad, it's on the ear that we can't see very well. My mistake. Also I came to notice that Tigerstar's pelt seems too light for being dark brown...same as Hawkfrost and Bramblestar... I think I'm gonna make a tweak nomination Storm  &#9835;  14:40, June 15, 2015 (UTC)

can you remove the scar on the outside on his tail? a cat doesnt have flesh there. 07:52, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg furthest from us. 21:56, June 16, 2015 (UTC)

It looks like your light is coming from in front of the cat's face. So, the whole tail should be in shadow, and anything lined up with the angle the spine is at (the upper back, upper neck, top of the head, part of the tail that connects with the spine, etc) should all be in light. Most of the belly would be in shadow, too. 02:24, June 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:38, June 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved.