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Unknown Residence Blank - For Approval
Did I do the title right? Idk. Thanks to everyone who voted for my blank, the other entries were amazing as well! I plan on making the ears a little smaller, shortening the tail slightly, and shortening the leg that shows the paw pads. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:29, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Could you shorten the outer lineart by maybe a pixel or two? Seems a little thick compared to the rest. 20:20, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

The floof on the longhair could be made less spiky and more round. 20:23, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

I actually disagree? It's not so much sharper than say the elder, healer, or unknown residence. Unless others disagree with me. 20:27, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

i think the longhair looks fine, i would just ythin the outer lineart like vec said and i think it would be perf! 20:32, July 4, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think the longhair could be a little... less spiky/more smooth. Just a little bit, though (on the back of the head in particular). 22:41, July 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:12, July 6, 2019 (UTC)

not sure but should there be a line/pixels to indicate the shift from the main skull to the inside of the ear? 05:38, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

looking at pictures of other cats, i feel like the nose bridge should be more perpendicular to with respect to the eye 14:55, July 8, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the shorthaired's tail lineart a little more

I think the tail could also curve at the bottom more too? Just at the moment, to me, it looks like its too straight due to the image crop

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:02, July 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the neck on the short hair on the far left side should be less curved and more straight? 16:05, July 15, 2019 (UTC)

i think thats to show the shape of the head 11:51, 7/17/2019

Reuploaded Made it a little more straight - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:37, July 19, 2019 (UTC)

I think the ear furthest away from us might be more ---> that way with this angle? I might be wrong though, if you have a reference photo handy though?

Reuploaded - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:44, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

For the longhair's fluffy back, could you make it less... dense for the lack of a better word? I'm inclined to think that the fur wouldn't sit that high in this sort of position, meaning it wouldn't really differ much from the shorthair's fur in that spot? It's normally more around the neck areas, and belly that the fur is noticeably longer.

Around the outer edge (frame, I guess) of the longhaired, could you ensure that it's roughly 2px all the way about? Seems thick still in some spots

I think <<< this space on the shorthair's side should be cropped a tiny bit. -- 18:58, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Lioneye (Ki) ~ For Approval


21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

The stripe color seems a bit off (could be my eyes), and the stripes also appear sharper and rougher (instead of smooth and sleek) as well. 02:20, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

21:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes that I have on the unknown file is #d28121, they look a little too pale on this. The earpink looks a bit darker too, could you make it a little brighter? 03:39, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 18:16, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Loudbelly (W) ~ For Approval


21:10, July 22, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined + smoothed a little 02:05, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Meadowslip (W) - For Evaluation
it's really bad, i think i might have to redo it. 18:43, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

The base needs to match the other images in the set, along with the ear/nosepink and eyes. Expand the shading more on the haunch, chest, and triangle stomach area, and add more to the tail bend and shoulder area near the back. Define the eye depth. Lastly, smooth out the shading everywhere, I reccommend a 10px smudge tool set at 40% strength, and rub it back and forth on the edges of the shading.

I hope this helps! 18:52, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded.  19:15, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the texture, her queen doesn't have that. Lighten the shading a small bit and smooth it out more. 19:16, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:22, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the light on the back leg closest to us, the front leg closest to us, and > this ear, and recede the neck shading. Expand the shading more on on the haunch, and add some connecting shading on the tail bend. Base is still a shade too light from the queen. What I do if I want to colorpick is I copy the image into another layer and use the colorpick tool to colorpick, then I hide the layer. Smooth out the shading more. 19:27, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

Fill in the missing hind leg, too. 19:32, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reups, i matched the queen. now i'll fix the shading and fill in the missing leg. 19:38, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

I'm not seeing a difference in the shading, so could you smooth it out more? 19:41, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 19:47, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

Smooth out the shading more on the chest shoulder and haunch, a bit on the tail too. 19:49, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

What's the light source here? 19:50, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. top left corner. 19:54, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

If your source is coming from the top left corner, all of the legs would be in shadow with this source (I think, but correct me if I'm wrong here). The shading could still be smoothed out, and defined on the stomach and haunch. 21:28, July 23, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 22:02, July 23, 2019 (UTC)'''

With that light source, I'm not sure there would be shading on (our) top left shoulder? 02:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

mhm. okay. 02:21, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. is this better? 02:26, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading looks too overblurred, and more should be added along the curve of the haunch. 03:45, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth everywhere (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). 03:46, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)'''

Can't tell if its just my eyes playing tricks, but, the image looks blurry? It might just be the waste outside the image doing that, so removing that might help. But, also smooth the shading some more on the back leg closest to us, so that it matches the smoothness you have for the front legs/chest area. This is looking really good!

'''reuploaded. '''

Add some shading to the other ear, define the shading depth, add more shading along the haunch, and remove the waste that's floating around her (ears, paws, tail is where the waste is). Define the light on >>> this side of the tail too. 22:12, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Just as a head's up, you should be matching the original warrior, which the coloring should be from this version, as that was posted first. I only tweaked some eyelash issues. For some reason, the queen looks a little darker... ​​

Ferk tweaked the queen and since I think she darkened the base​ because she was the OA. 12:16, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Regardless, this should match the original warrior, since that was first, not the queen. If anything, the queen should be tweaked to match the warrior. ​​

'''reuploaded. is this better, Jayce? 17:38, July 25, 2019 (UTC)'''

The shading on the tail seems to end abruptly, and there is a tiny bit of waste between the front and back paws.  Windsong  Run with the wind... ❀ 18:00, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, too, overall. 20:22, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light source on the tail. 20:24, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. question - if my image doesn't get approved within a month, will it get declined? 01:02, July 26, 2019 (UTC)'''

After a month of it being on the approval page, the image will be declined, yes. Can you define the light on the tail, and just a tad bit on the front leg closest to us? 23:49, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

I feel the shading could still be lightened overall 02:45, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

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'''reuploaded. 23:08, July 27, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image still appears to be overblurred, try checking your layers for waste and removing it to reduce the blurryness. -- 23:13, July 27, 2019 (UTC) '''reuploaded. meadowslip, have mercy on me.'''

Lighten/smooth the shading. -- 01:36, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. 03:00, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out more. Here's a little tip: If you're constantly being told to smooth out the shading, smooth it out a lot more than you usually do. I learned this and it really helps, trust me. -- 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

okay, thanks. 19:47, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 19:59, July 28, 2019 (UTC)'''

The image has that overblurred look to it again. Try checking for waste to remove or see if the background is acting up. -- 20:02, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 21:56, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and add more shading depth in general to the image. -- 22:06, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:22, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Leafpool (K) ~ For Approval
01:53, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body should be thinner (you may have to add more after that), and the tips of the ears should be dark brown, too. 03:42, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't really be texture, just smudge lines from the stripes.

Reuploaded I might've did a thing 20:43, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are less curvy on her other images

The stripes also appear to be less soft and slightly sharper on the other images. -- 18:59, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Yes? No? Maybe? 02:27, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes more. -- 15:43, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Attempts were made 15:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Mistmouse (W) - For Approval
referenced the tunneler 06:13 Wed Jul 24

I think the shading could be defined and expanded some 11:09, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 23:06 Thu Jul 25

I think the stripes on the original warrior were a little softer than what's on the tunneler and queen. I realize it's not the same side anymore, but the master pattern design seems to have gotten lost with the other chararts. ​​​​

should i redo the stripes to reference the warrior more? or keep the pattern but just soften them? 23:50 Fri Jul 26

I think softening them would work, but it's your choice. Could you also smooth the shading slightly? -- 00:01, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

I think you should refernece the old warrior, and we could always tweak the other images. I think I brought this up before with the queen image years ago, but got told "it's the opposite side"... which is true, yes, but I think it should still match the old warrior.. That's part of the reason that the tunneler has the stripes it does. ​

I feel the shading could be blurred some more 03:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded old warrior has been referenced <span style="">00:45 Mon Jul 29

Nettlesplash (K) - For Approval


22:41, July 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little and it could just be my phone but I think the shading is leaking a little at the bottom of the haunch 02:30, July 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

20:39, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. -- 20:47, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

21:03, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but I still think the shading depth should be defined. -- 21:16, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe it’s just my screen, but the shading seems to be leaking around all the lineart edges. 21:21, July 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the shading a little darker? 03:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

04:26, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a tidbit more. -- 15:44, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Mudclaw (WC) (W) - CBA
the starclan sprite is darker colored than the other two sprites, so i just went off of the apprentice sprite since it was the most recently uploaded. let me know if i should follow the starclan one instead! 00:51, July 27, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I believe the old redone warrior and redone star were first in the set, so I think they are the master colors. please excuse me if I'm wrong -- 01:00, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

StarClan has the correct coloring, as I'm the one who designed it and the pattern was mine. The original design was the warrior+old deputy before we redid those blanks, and then the StarClan came along not long after. ​​

ok!! i fixed it, also redid the stripes to match better 02:40, July 27, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I'm pretty sure with this light source there should be shading on --> side of <-- leg but feel free to correct me if I'm wrong 03:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

this is the same shading i've used for all my other sprites, the light is coming in from the pov of the viewer so just a bit of light is hitting that front leg 04:24, July 28, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 19:19, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Lynxkit (Ki) ~ CBA
Holy hecc this boi's image so old <span style="">03:44, 7/27/2019

Define the shading slightly? -- 03:46, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

reup <span style="">00:13, 7/28/2019

CBA? 19:19, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Moonflower (W) - CBA
I... tried. 05:49, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

The stripes seem more hard edged on her other images

Re-uploaded. 17:01, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste floating around the tail tip. -- 17:07, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:33, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

looking at the star, the stripes are stylized to be blurry. here, the stripes look smudgy. 03:14, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does this look better? 03:49, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

hm yeah. i also think the stripes look slightly denser on the star and im not sure about this one, but also a tad lighter? 06:24, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 15:55, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 03:24, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (W) - For Approval
gotta love rank mistakes. I'll. go fix the stripes or something later. Not feeling good at the present moment. ​​

Re-uploaded. Hmm.

Little bit of leaking shading right in the middle of the haunch shading. 19:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Nutwhisker (W) - For Approval
What a great name! 14:28, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a little bit. -- 16:50, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:14, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth overall slightly, and the shading on the tail? -- 23:22, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

i feel like a cat's pupil would take up more space. 03:17, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

On the original warrior and the apprentice, the texture looks smoother 03:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:37, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Texture could still be smoothed a little bit more. 19:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:30, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Morningflower (ki) - For Approval
Attempted to match the apprentice. 17:34, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

do you want the file for the colors? 02:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

edit: the file is useless for the colors, but useful for how the image was intended to be done. 03:11, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Sure if you could send me that, that would be appreciated! :) 03:24, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Ki) - For Approval
protect this angel pulled all the colors from the queen  18:14, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

The base looks just a tad darker ligher than what you have.-- 18:15, July 27, 2019 (UTC)


 * the colors came directly picked from my file current file of the queen image. it's fine 18:19, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

The mottles appear brighter than on her other images. 19:38, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:36, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

i actually agree with potato that this looks brighter than her other images. the colors may have been colorpicked, but it could've been the way the highlights were drawn that makes it look brighter. 03:12, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:09, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. W 2) ~For Approval
Comments? 23:01, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading overall. -- 23:02, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:48, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

I don't think with this source there would be any shading on <-- shoulder 03:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on both front legs. -- 15:45, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Mousefur (Alt. W 2) ~ CBA
Comments? 23:01, July 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 03:25, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Hickorynose (Alt. W) - For Approval
He soft -- 00:07, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed a few things -- 00:10, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Add some shading underneath the chin, and perhaps expand/define the head shading? This looks very nice! 04:22, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 15:13, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the main body shading some? 21:39, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:05, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Moss Tail (W) - For Approval
The spree of light sources continue -- 01:46, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

I think there's some waste above ---> front paw and next to the ---> ear. 02:55, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

the eye color looks desaturated here compared to her other images. 03:16, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I colorpicked off the hunter for the eye color so it should look better now. -- 15:14, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (W) - CBA
03:09, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? Nicely done! 03:25, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Gorsetail (TNP) (W) ~ For Approval
I think the shading needs to be smoothed some :/ also not sure how the tint came out 03:22, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Yes the shading is very blotchy. Could you expand it some on the haunch? That should help. And maybe de-saturate the tint a bit? 04:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

The shading from the haunch is leaking onto the leg, and the shading is leaking on the back paw farthest from us. -- 15:15, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redid the shading entirely

Don't forget your sig! Smooth out the shading overall. -- 17:05, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt W) ~ For Approval
No idea what this pattern is or where it came from but it looked easy 03:21, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

It came from her official artwork, for reference. Could you smooth the tail stripes but a bit more, define the facial stripes, and add some shading to ---> ear? 04:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Add more depth to the legs and < that ear, and define the eye depth a bit. -- 15:16, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded that doesn't explain what this pattern is. This is not a physically possible fur pattern. What was this illustrator doing 15:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, espscially on the haunch and tail. -- 17:07, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Nettlebreeze (K) ~ CBA
04:18, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:39, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Milkfur (YS) (K) ~ CBA
Not entirely sure about this one. 04:18, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 15:39, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
alright fellas 1/3 04:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Both eyes should be blinded, judging by the elder image. Also, I think the haunch and back leg stripes could be just a tiny bit thicker

Could you make his eyes a bit more cloudy? I think blurring the pixels a bit (while slightly retaining the eye color) might work. -- 15:17, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

re-up sweet 16:35, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Make his eyes more whitish, since his eyes were clouded over when they were scratched. His pupils would also be visible, but faintly. -- 19:25, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reup is that better? 04:13, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Yes, definitely! -- 04:15, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (W) ~ For Approval
alright fellas 2/3 04:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading and define the depth a little?

Soften up the texture a lot more, and add more shading along the chest since it's slightly flat. -- 15:19, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

re-up 16:35, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Lilywhisker (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT 3/3 04:32, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Same as above, but, could you also smooth out the lineart tweak a little for her leg? The bottom bit of the leg shouldn't slant upwards that much, I don't think, and could stand to be a little more horizontal? If you'd like, I could give a redline for what I mean?

Same as above, soften the texture and add more shading to the chest. -- 15:20, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Hey Max! A redline guide would be much appreciated! I tried going off Deadfoot but uhhh, his twisted paw is on the other side of the warrior, unfortunately. 16:07, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

re-up istill wanna get that redline but i tried it again just for my sake 16:33, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the leg, to make it more consistent with the image's lineart. -- 20:04, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

reup 04:12, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart more around the paw area, but the leg area looks fine. -- 04:16, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Here ya go Bramble; here's my quick as redline - hope it helps! There'd also be another line where the paw connects to the leg, to show a bit of a twist - like on Deadfoot's old warrior for reference :D

Leopardstar (K) ~ For Approval


The lighter sections on her markings seem to be less noticeable on her other images. This also looks a lot lighter than the set too, though, I'm assuming its matching to your leader?

Re-uploaded yeah, I did, though I color picked from the lightest part of the apprentice that seems to be the base color. I expanded the shading loads, which seems to be the main reason why the apprentice image looks dark.

Millie (W) ~ CBA


CBA? 15:40, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ki) ~ For Approval
at this point i'm not even sure what i'm doing.

You did fine Star Desaturate the tint a tiny bit on the white? -- 15:54, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

re-up thank you

The orange patches on her fur seem too saturated, could you darken them a bit 17:32, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Can I have a point of reference or something? Because when I colorpicked from the rogue this was the color I got, and the loner's color doesn't exactly work. If I'm being honest, the colors seem kinda inconsistent to me between the loner and the rogue.

Mudclaw (ShC) (W) ~ For Approval
No the other Mudclaw. 20:07, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Alt. Ki) - For Approval
None of her alt. images are consistent, so I tried to match the original kit. 21:37, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the tail patch a bit more. 03:28, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Alt. W) - For Approval
Tried to match the original alt. kit. 21:37, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the tail patch, and where the orange/black meet on the tail patch. 03:28, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Mosskit (TC) (Ki) - For Approval
An attempt was made (matched to the Star because I couldn't colorpick from the original kit). 21:58, July 28, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the patches should be a tad sharper, and there should be a white line through the middle gray haunch patch as seen on the kit. 03:30, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Leopardstar (W) - For Approval
this was so hard why was this so hard, mainly reffed the starclan  <span style="">00:29 Mon Jul 29

No one knows Can you define the tail stripes a teeny bit more? -- 00:31, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">04:56 Mon Jul 29

it's a mounty pattern I think there's more variety in spot size, and the base seems lighter on the apprentice image, which came first.

Leaf (DotC) (W) - For Approval
I actually remember really liking this guy 01:03, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Mosspelt (W) - For Approval
01:03, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Longtail (W) - For Approval
01:03, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Does the tail lineart have to match Brambleshade's alt? Since it's a major feature and he's named for it, I think he does. though I could be way wrong, someone correct me if so -- 01:31, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

You're right, I'll ask them for it 02:09, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (BS) (W) - For Approval
04:30, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sunstar (W) - For Approval
09:10, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Lakeheart (W) - For Evaluation
this sucks bad. 16:57, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

It actually doesn't, it looks good. There needs to be more stripes and they to be sharper and more wavy. -- 17:02, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. '''  17:12, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

Could you sharpen them more? -- 17:15, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

There should also be a dorsal stripe along the back and tail, the head stripes don't match (see the queen), and there should also be texture, too. 17:16, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

okay. i'll get on it right now. 17:50, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded. i'm going to brighten her chest, legs and muzzle in a moment. 18:05, July 29, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:39, July 29, 2019 (UTC)'''

Mapleshade (W) ~ For Approval
*maple leaf rag intensifies*