Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 113

Dappletail (W) - Tweaked
OA is Raelic and icy tweaked for white patches. 09:59, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gonna be that person too, and I think there's too much white on her images.

Re-uploaded i honestly thought it was fine on this image, but on the elder and Star i agree. 11:24, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 03:46, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) ~ Tweaked
gaystripe 21:08, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 03:46, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Dappletail (E) - Tweaked
OA is Raelic. Tweaked for white patches. 12:03, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Same as warrior and StarClan; there's way too much white. It obstructs the previous pattern.

reupped shit this was yesterday 02:36, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours 08:21, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstep (Star) ~ Redone
OA is Mistypebble. 05:40, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Could you blur the chest shading just a bit more? 20:17 Mon Oct 19

define the shading some everywhere. 20:58, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 08:31, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours 08:32, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Dappletail (Star) ~ Tweaked
OAs were Raelic and Diablo 13:25, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

theres too much white, and arent these supposed to be traced over the creamy patches essentially? that was the entire problem, that they looked a bit cream rather than white. 13:35, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

I nominated for the definition OR the addition of white patches and the nomination passed without anyone saying that there was a problem with adding any. 13:42, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

either way im sticking with there being too muc white, and it should be reduced some. 13:58, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, it obstructs the pattern a lot and you can barely see the old one...

Re-uploaded 02:41, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you're allowed to change the eyes...

Re-uploaded The white leaked into them XC 03:35, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

can you put some shadow on the white parts that'd be in shadow? they just look oddly bright. 21:00, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 08:38, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours 08:53, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Cherrytail (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Ivy 09:14, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours

Pineclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
shadin 10:47, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours 11:32, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shellheart (E) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to remove ragged fur. OA is Shelly with a tweak by Trollsky. If this is not needed or Trollsky wants it, I will withdraw it. I just noticed it was on the tweak list for a while without anyone claiming it. Shading will be fixed/defined in next upload. 20:35, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

don't worry about it, i left it for anyone to claim. can you tweak the earpink's colour a little bit to match the other images more? 20:41, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

reupped 20:56, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading? 08:31, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

reupped 17:57, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 00:12, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Frisk (Ki) ~ Redone

 * (it seems your journey is finally over.)


 * (you're filled with determination.) 05:20, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Simply gorgeous. I like how this pattern is thought out. Could you brighten the ear pink just a little? it seems to be difficult to see. Nice job! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 05:24, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more? 14:06, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 17:45, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 00:12, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Stonefur (D) ~ Tweaked
OA is -Bramble, redo artist is Mistystar129 and tweakers are Mount Everest and me. Tweaked to untear one of the ears. Apple, since you're working on the warrior I don't mind if you want to copy the ear from the deputy. 21:52, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

ear scars could be smudged more. 22:18, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:28, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add shading depth? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:50, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:11, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Get rid of the white background 11:58, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

That wasn't Stealth's error- someone keeps reuploading under the file name with an image that has a white background.

24 hours. 00:12, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Olivenose (W) - Redo
Redone to match description. Might tweak this tomorrow after I've had some sleep.

Could you define the shape of the ear pink just a bit? the colors make it blend in really well and I'm having trouble telling the difference between the pelt and the ear pink? Dang, Paleh. This is beautiful.

I'll get on that in the morning. I'll probably also tweak the shading a bit too, especially on the tail.

Define the shading (unless that's what you meant by tweaking the shading), and define the light on the muzzle and paws. 14:44, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid the shading completely to be all pretty. Also redid the earpink and removed the markings behind it to make it easier to tell apart from the rest of the markings.

24 hours. 00:12, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sunstrike (star) - Redone
Okay what even is this. I know I forgot the white streak so I'll add that later. OA was beebs. 05:39, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Also do not complain about the white. Torties have white. This is based off of my tortoiseshell cat who has white paws, a white chest, and white on her muzzle. So. 05:41, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

eye depth needs defining. 05:42, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Just want to point at that there was never an argument about whether torties could have white, it was just about the fact that white markings without description is an assumption. But sunstrike was described with white, so I certainly have no complaints. Could you tweak the color of the brown (the one on her shoulder) a bit? It looks awfully... muddy. I actually thought this was a tribe cat for a second cause of it. Maybe just saturate or lighten it a tad.

Paleh, this was color picked off of my actual cat. But if you really think I should change it then I can. 05:46, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

I thought the whole point of the vote was that we decided tortoiseshells who aren't described as tortie-and-white in the text  don't  have white on them? But since Sunstrike is described to have some white on her pelt, I'm not sure abotu that one. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:47, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lower the amount of white; just keep the white mark she's described with on her forehead instead of having the other points. 05:47, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

(Paleh's comment pretty much already said this, but I was about to post this before hers when my comment got commeted over top of, and I still wanted to post it. :P) Also, define the shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:48, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

No dont lower the amount of white. Get rid of it all except for one on her forehead 05:49, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Got rid of the white except for the one on her forehead - I know it's too round shhh. All I did was take the white off, but I will define the shading on the nxt upload. I also do know I hvae to add more patches (do I? I think I do) but yeah. 05:56, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Someone should totally help me out because smudge tool on gimp isn't smudging send help  06:02, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

The white mark should be larger than that 07:01, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Try smudging with a hard edged brush 07:29, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Make the white larger, she was described with a large white mark 11:49, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Fox i already said that... 11:57, October 23, 2015 (UTC) Add more depth to the chest shading.--Dewsplash (talk) 13:39, October 23, 2015 (UTC)Dewsplash, 13:39, October, 23, 2015

Re-uploaded: Remember that one time where Appledash had an entire folder dedicated to her art in PCA and all of it wasn't just splayed around random files and downloads? Yeah me too 19:17, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

I still really think the brown needs to change color. Or if you're set on keeping the color, at least break it up more on her chest/shoulder area. Right now it really makes it seem like she just walked through mud or something. Also, I'd say probably make the head mark even bigger, closer to what it was before. I'd consider the size it is right now to be average sized, not "large."

Re-uploaded: I legit just told you, this was colorpicked off of several images of my cat all in different places. Also I think I made the head mark too smaller this time? Idk, I'll fix that. Kill me 23:31, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

To be honest, whether it was color picked off a picture or not is irrelevant for many reasons. For one, picking colors directly off of photos doesn't always work great for chararts because photos are nothing like digital art. On a photo, there could be 70 different shades in one spot due to lighting and texture, and only 1 of them might be considered the "true color" that would work and display right when used in digital art. In some cases, due to lighting, there won't even be a color that works for something like chararts. Say the photo's from bright sunlight, surrounded by autumn leaves. It'd be completely different from a photo in a dimly lit room with white walls. Color picking doesn't always mean it's a good color to use. Also, even if you happened to get the "true color" that just happened to translate well to digital art, that doesn't mean it's the right color to use in this specific cat. And notice that I also said if you're really set on using this color, which you seem to be, you can also break it up more on the chest and shoulders to get rid of the mud effect it's having right now.

Re-uploaded: Not in the mood to argue. 00:10, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 13:24, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Runningstorm (SC) - Redone
OA was me. redone for issues. 03:01 Fri Oct 16

Beautiful. Define the shading? 03:09, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:51 Sun Oct 18

Would you mind defining the shading just a tad more? 23:57, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

The opacity is actually at 100%. If you could tell me where exactly it needs defining, I'll create a new layer and go over it :) 20:18 Mon Oct 19

Just the head and the legs ^^ This is very pretty 20:32, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. thanks! <3 00:57 Thu Oct 22

Darken the chest shading 08:26, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shadow? ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:51, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. 01:29 Sat Oct 24

24 hours. 13:25, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sunstrike (App) - Redone
Redone to remove white 15:38, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the warrior.

Re-ups 12:02, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 13:27, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Sunstrike (W) ~ Redone
Same 17:00, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

This is beautiful! My cat would be very proud of how you did her. Can you just possibly define the light on the stomach? Gorgeous as always. 23:26, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Tweak the brown markings on the chest/shoulder to match the star. Nice job on this.

Re-ups Thanks ^^ 12:01, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 13:27, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (W) ~ Redone
OA is SnowedLightning and Bbun. Redone to remove white. 14:20, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 21:21, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Stonefur (W) - Tweaked
Got rid of the tweaked ear. 22:57, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 23:38, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

Mistystar (W) ~ Tweaked
Second try.

Blur the shading some more and define it on the most unvisible paw. 18:10, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups

Blur the shading more, please.

re-ups Believe me or not, it's actually getting over-blurred. I toned the shading down a bit and hopt that helps.

It is not over-blurred. Blur the haunch more please. 12:36 Mon Oct 12

re-ups I tried, okay? ;-; I cannot blur it anymore...

try enlightening the shading and have a mix of smudging and bluring shading. It might help. 15:01, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the neck shading? 05:24, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail? 22:46, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 21:10, October 16, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups

As per the guidelines, it has been a week. This must be declined. 09:41, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over. 20:39, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Oh sheesh what happened to the shading???? 20:55, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? 23:54, October 18, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:06, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks...grey. it's really noticable. 06:48, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

It is pure black, just the opacity is lowered. Idk do I try tinting it or something? 06:59, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

yeah id give it a go at making it bluer with a tint, it just looks odd right now. 07:01, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload redone the extra shading. Looks neater now. 07:11, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Why is there a random yellow patch? 07:32, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

I have no idea where that came from. O.o I didn't use any highlights at all, just added shading. I'll try to get rid of it. 07:36, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Think I got it. 07:39, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's still there 08:29, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 20:48, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

i can still see that odd grey. 21:01, October 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can you be more specific as to what you mean please? 20:56, October 20, 2015 (UTC)

The yellow gray, on her main body 07:07, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Can I please have a redline? Sorry I keep doing this, I just don't really see that well at all and I want to make sure it's all gone. 07:17, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

http://www.ezimba.com/work/151021C/ezimba11283577128500.png 07:23, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some shading depth? 14:06, October 21, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Thanks for that The Fox Girl! Boy it was worse than I original thought O.o 06:22, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Please call me Fox. Also, I'm still seeing the yellow gray... 06:24, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 06:44, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still seeing it, i'm sorry. Try putting a new layer of the actual color and cover up the yellow parts 08:39, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I'm practically redoing it >< 21:52, October 22, 2015 (UTC)

Are you sure you chose the right color? because now I see the yellow everywhere. But I'm just an apprentice so I don't honestly know if I'm right ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 01:52, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I colour-picked off the apprentice now. 05:06, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

She looks too saturated to me. 14:51, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean by that and how do I fix it? 21:43, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

The shading color is making her look too blue, I think? I'm not entirely sure... 22:59, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

If you're not sure, can I have a second opinion? 23:16, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with BC, please desaturate the shading, it also could you the reason why the gray looked so yellow. 23:31, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload The shading's pure black now. 23:40, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 05:13, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Poppycloud (W) - Tweaked
OA was Paleh. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:44, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Forgot to say, tweaked to remove white. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:44, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 05:13, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Morningflower (E) - Redone
OA is Iceheart22. 04:54, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

Her description says she's light, so the colors need to be changed. If you leave the black, either add more or define it, since it's sort of looking like just dark shading right now, now so much like a tortie.

I say we should keep the general style of the old image, just with less white. The pattern itself was fine, if a tad overblurred. Keep the colours and general pattern. Just remove some of the white and change it a bit to be less blurred/smudged 05:03 Fri Oct 23

While I liked the original pattern, it's within the artist's right to change the pattern on a full-set redo unless otherwise specified in the nomination. I'm happy either way, but just pointing that out.

define the shading everywhere, i cant see any of it. 05:23, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

so? We're already redoing a stupid amount of images for a reason that doesn't really matter. imo the original pattern was fine and the colours were what thy needed to be. Why not try to at least save the images we can as much as we can?? 05:28 Fri Oct 23

I'm not saying we shouldn't. Like I said, I like the original pattern. I was just giving a gentle remind that it's artist's choice in this case, so it shouldn't be forced or anything.

I've seen people being told in the past after posting that a pattern needs to match the old one and they had to. The same case should apply here. The pattern was perfectly fine. There's no point in totally changing all of these damn patterns. 07:41 Fri Oct 23

Re-uploaded jesus christ there you go >.> 11:30, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

The colours need to be lighter. Typically a light tortie has a light grey and ginger colouring. Not unlike the colours she already had. 11:38 Fri Oct 23

Re-uploaded I seriously get the fact you want me to completely match the other images. There's no need to keep hinting and repeating over and over again. 11:54, October 23, 2015 (UTC)

At this point, no, I'm saying she needs to be a light tortie. She isn't right now. She is a plain tortie. All I'm saying is that the former images colours were what a light tortie should be, so use them as a reference if you need to. 12:16 Fri Oct 23

Re-uploaded 13:47, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours. 17:51, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Morningflower (Q) ~ Redone
if beebs was here she'd do way better than me on her image ;; 02:44, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Add texture to her pale chest. 02:44, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded now i realized how hard it is to match Burnt's patterns 02:47, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Could you make the ear pink less white? I can't see it very well, but it might be my own tired eyes. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:04, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine, it was probably colorpicked from another image and it's the right color for brown cats. 15:52, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours since I last re-uploaded 09:02, October 27, 2015 (UTC)