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Henry (KP) ~ Redone
Was on the Tweak list for being redone. OA was Bramble. This is horrible >:U 21:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Not. Horrible. Great. Is there a tabby M? If it's those two lines then disregard this... 21:33, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's just two lines. 21:36, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the back lines more maybe use the eye ref. on the tutorial, and darken the shading under his 'arm' 22:34, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think you should darken the overall shading. 00:29, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I was kind of confused about what you said, Wild. 03:07, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

And about the eyes, I copied 'em off of CLoudtail. 03:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look kind weird though, like his eyes are bugging out about a worm on the ground or something. Could you copy off the tutorial? They look more natural on there. 05:26, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes and thicken them. ,15:18,January 25,2012 (UTC)

I meant smudge the stripes into the fur, and the part where the belly meets the front arm there should be some shading, and use the PCA charart tutorial use the eye chart. 15:42, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. You guys were right abou tthe eyes xD 21:48, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the tail? 00:42, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the end of the stripes, darken the shading, add depth to the eyes, and add a couple more stripes to the legs. 01:55 Thu Jan 26

Lighten/define the earpink some more, too. I can barely see it. o3o 02:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes even more (smudge their points so they're sharper and less rounded at the ends) and add some more depth to the eyes. 03:44 Fri Jan 27

Re-Uploaded. 20:33, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. 22:55, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

re-Uploaded. 20:25, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the white speck in the eye pure white. o3o Epic. <3 07:45, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:37, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the earpink or something, old grandpa has trouble seeing it x3 Sky Dovahkiin  22:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

'Re-Uploaded. Gramps >:D 22:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define-ith the ear-ith pink-ith. *;3* 23:43, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back every so slightly. Daaaaaang, Fire. Where'd this skill come from all of the sudden? xD (jk, it's beautiful) 19:58, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Pfft, what talent? Re-Uploaded. 21:06, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and define the depth in the eyes  23:39, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:42, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Ki) ~ Redone
Sorry this is sloppy Dx OA was Quietstep with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart. Comments? 23:25, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 23:41, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:48, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, why do none of her images match her leader image? I just noticed they're all far too dark. 03:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪  Chinese New Year! Year of the Dragons!  12:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 15:20, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink still needs to be defined. 00:04, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

-Re-Uploaded.- 22:46, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

^^ Up there, with tweets by Minstarr and Iceheart.. this is not twitter xD. Anyways add depth to the eyes, but if you don't want to you don't have to. 07:42, Tue, Jan, 31, 2012

XDDD Sorry. Re-Uploaded. 20:08, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The base pelt is still too dark, take the color from her haunch where I don't have it shaded  23:40, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 23:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Tornear (W) ~ Redone
Here's Tornear. That texture you see is fur that I did on a different layer. It's kind of plain I know, but I'll probably redo him. 12:00, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be a little longer. Nice job.^^ 12:02, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry I forgot the OAs. OAs are Bramble, Goldenpaw, and Sandstar12. 12:25, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you. Change it if you redid it. =P 15:19, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It was redone, Ivy. 20:46, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

He should have stripes on the tail. Sky Watchu want? 03:49, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Trying to match his elder. 17:41, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

On the elder, it looks like there's a few more stripes along his back. Can you add some in? 22:52, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Once again; ew. 23:32, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, make the stripes longer and sharper at the ends, erase the waste between the legs, and blur the shading. 01:25 Sun Jan 29

Possibly connect a few stripes when you add more, and blur the edges of the stripes a bit. 23:17, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:51, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it. 03:14, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Sky Dovahkiin  06:52, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:16, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Would he need a mackerel stripe down his back since he has one on his tail? 21:39, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:41, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) ~ Tweaked
First tweak, and I'm not proud of it. He needed patchy fur. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire Comments? 12:24, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Naw, it looks good. ^.^ Could you perhaps blur where the skin meets the fur...? Where it meets looks too sharp. 13:13, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

The patches look like you're doing them fo ra cat with long fur. Try looking at Spiderstar's leader image for an example of a patch in short fur. Also, they look pretty red, when he probably has pale skin considering his fur color. Contrary to popular belief, they don't need to match his ear pink. 14:29, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ew. 15:16, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Kay, maybe not that pale. Also... my point in linking to Spiderstar was to show that the patches really don't need to be outlined. Just blur them in to look like fur, not chipped paint. 17:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And no, the patches are not the same color as the ear pink. I just darkened the skin color. 17:28, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the skin, as you would the earpink on an apprentice or leader. 17:30, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the help on the patches Shelly. 23:28, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Eh, they're still not quite there yet. 02:21, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Put a few lines around each patch, it helps keep lineart sense and helps to create a more natural feel (again, it kind of goes along with making sense with the lines). 04:47, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you give the patches a more tanner look? Breeze whisker  20:02, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  11:45, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 03:15, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  12:11, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

This might sound stupid, but is it possible to add a runny nose? 00:30, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

I did it with his mca image. Just a few green pixels around the nose. ;) 04:22, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt W) ~ Redone
Hey look, he's back! 8D OA=Nightshine with redo by Iceheart, same reasons as I stated earlier... Comments? 05:59, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I was sorta hoping he'd stay away...kidding. Lighten up the tail shading a bit. Sky Watchu want? 06:04, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink a tad, it looks sharp. Elo legs 20:55, January 29, 2012 (UTC) Cool texture. Define the eye depth. 03:20, Mon, Jan, 30, 2012

The original artist was actually Rainwhisper, though it doesn't matter. Blur the tail stripes. 02:05, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Heavystep (W) ~ Redone
He needed a redo because he was a triangle tabby before. OA was Bracken. Breeze whisker  06:12, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Goregeous. Define the earpink? 06:14, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

So good >.> Does he have a lighter chest? If it does, it beeds blurring cause it looks sharp. Sky Watchu want? 06:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  15:27, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn;t have a lighter chest...but since he's a tabby, tabbies usually have lighter underbellies or chests. So keep it there. 23:22, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

I lightened his chest, belly, muzzle, bottom of his tail, and his paws. Breeze whisker  02:10, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the paler paws some. 02:16, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and it looks transparent a bit. 16:40 Sun Jan 29

What looks transparent? Breeze whisker  19:53, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink isn't transparent but the earpink still needs to be defined. 23:12, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  22:27, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

This is amazing!! *u* Can you make the earpink a tad bit pinker? It's still kinda hard to see. 03:17, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The eye looks kinda odd.... I don't think it's any style of eyes I've seen before. I know it's artist's choice, so you don't have to, but any chance of you changing it? This is absolutely breathtaking regardless. 07:07, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Its fine, as long as it shows eye color, there's nothing to worry about. Also, with what Heartmountain said, maybe make the earpink color the same as the older image, but not as pale..? cause this color right know kinda blends with the pelt. idunnolol. 00:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the earpink and added an extra pixel for the pupil in the eye. Breeze whisker  04:49, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) ~ Redone
OA was Mousetalon. He was a triangle tabby, and I got permission to redo him. Comments? 23:19, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Ears need to be tuffed. 23:25, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit. 02:20 Sun Jan 29

There is some white/pale gray pixels above the tail tip. 02:50, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Darken/define the shading. Breeze whisker  19:55, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purplely. -- Elo legs 20:54, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. 07:26 Wed Feb 1

Deadfoot (D) - Tweaked
Snagged the last spot! Original artist was Darkhallows, with a redo by Paleclaw, and the twisted paw needed to be on his left leg. Comments? 04:57, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Actually it was surprisingly a tweak by me, though only really the old lineart ended up being kept. XD But doesn't matter. :P Darken the front leg farthest from us. 05:26, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Haha, it looked like it was redone to me. 16:14, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

You've been asked about this before. Could you fix the lineart on his paws? It's too thin, and you're usually not supposed to be changing the lineart besides what you're supposed to do. 03:19, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

I thought this project was about making accurate character art, not fussing over paw lineart. This is consistent with his description, so it's fine. No random person browsing through the wiki is going to care about the paw lineart. 18:01, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't matter. You can't edit the lineart however it pleases you. You have been told to change it before, but blatantly ignored us. Just change it; it's not that big of a deal. 19:18, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Only for this image. 20:40, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

The tail seems like it's been cut off. Put lineart over the whole thing and then fill that in, or move the image up...basically just do something. 23:38, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

...where is it cut off? 23:23, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) ~ Redone
Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it. 02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad. 06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar. 05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D  19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sunfish (W) ~ Tweaked
The bad shading on this has bugged me for a while. I'm the OA. Comments? 13:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Elo legs 13:34, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Y u steal my spot? XD Define the shading on the tail. 14:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random light spot on her haunch o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahkiin  21:52, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the ear pink smaller? I didn't think it was supposed to take up the entire ear. But, then again, it is artist's choice. XD 19:51, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy (Ki) - Redone
Original artist was Honeyfur, and he was a triangle tabby. Comments? 18:05, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. This is so cute! :D <span style="">18:15 Tue Jan 31

Reuploaded 18:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. 19:17, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:42, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. 21:54, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:33, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Piper (Ki) ~ Redone
It needed to be redone for several reasons. I got permission. OA was Mistystar. Comments? 01:10, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I hate you for making such amazing chararts. ;.; How are you so epic? DX Anyways, the only thing I can see that could be changed is, can you lighten the shading on the legs? 07:53, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Aww *sniff sniff* Thank you so much Paleh ;.; *wuggles* I don't think I'll ever be as good as you 8) 14:38, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the white? So cute! :D 21:01, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look like strings of yarn, heehee. I think you should make the nose pink, since then nose is on white, not grey. 21:30, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thankies ^^ 22:25, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) ~ Tweaked
She needed her shading blurred/redone, and the OA looks like Sandstar12, with a tweak by Flamingomom. I also tweaked the earpink, because I believe hot-pink isn't exactly the right shade. xD Comments? 01:14, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I have to go make the background transparent... I'll reupload in a sec. 01:15, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and blur it. 01:16, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stupid earpink... x.x 01:29, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. ^^ Just lighten her a bit, as this is a bit too dark to be dark gray. 07:13, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gracias. o3o 03:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

She still looks a little dark. I think her images should be tweaked to make the color more like Yellowfang ^^  01:09, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (Ki) - Redone
Redone to match apprentice image. I actually like this one. OA was Sandwich989? I'm not sure, with maybe a tweak by Bramble (but I think it was just adding transperancy. Comments? <span style="">01:57, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Cute ^^ Blur the black patches. 02:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. <span style="">02:56, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

Define the shading. 19:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the nose should be grey because the black is covering the nose, not the white. 23:22, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  <span style="">06:11, Thu, Feb, 2, 2012

Wing (PH) ~ Tweaked
Let's try this again, shall we? 19:42, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and just so I don't get into trouble... OA is moi. =D 19:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink. ;D <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Purple" >Sky Dovahjerk 06:33, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is there any way you can change the pattern? I know this caused drama last time but it still looks like really awkward shading that needs blurring. 20:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm with Oblivion on this one. <span style="">04:43 Fri Feb 3

Cloudtail (W) - Tweaked
Just lightening it and defining the light source a bit. Oh, and toning down the earpink. OA was Bramble with a tweak/redo by Cloudy. Comments? 14:57, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Alt Ro.) - Redone
OA was Nightflower of ThunderClan. She needed her snout shortened, more scars, ruffled fur, and her images were redone before because of the shading. 00:46, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add the creases to her face like her apprentice? Lovely ^^ 00:47, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded All I had to do was add a line...darn do I feel stupid! XD 01:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Have the line connect with the top of the muzzle, since the crease goes that far around. 01:17, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Q) ~ Tweaked
Angry pregnant Yellowfang judges you. Anyway, made the muzzle match the fabulous apprentice image. Comments? 04:19, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is a bit of extra lineart sticking out on the left side (our left) of her chin. This is pretty epic Shellyward XP 04:21, February 3, 2012 (UTC)