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Mitzi (Lo) (Ki) ~ For Approval
OK, I shouldnt be doing black cats on this laptop because the colors are all screwed up and I have to squint to see the shading. But here. 20:01, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Darken her maybe and dull down the Ear Pink. She looks grey on my screen. (correct me if I am wrong about the earpink)  20:14, February 9, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a blacked out nose? 03:09 Tue Feb 10

Actually, I think I asked Breezey about this once, and black cats don't need to have black noses. I think they can have a darker reddish nose, or something along those lines.

Mind darkening him a tad? He seems pretty light. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 10:45, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Brambleshade already said that, Burntclaw^^ Also, may you define the tail shading? 15:55, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Dew Nose 19:46, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

I'll take over :P 22:13, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Updated 23:12, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Nice job! 23:58, February 10, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna bring attention to the fact that it's got the wrong file name; could an admin fix that for Bramble? 00:07, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

I believe I could fix it. 00:09, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated There we go. I really like her :3 00:11, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Mind lightening up the ear pink a little? Gorgeous, Bramble :$ ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:14, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Updated I think she is one fine kitty <3 Any better? 00:21, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere but the legs, and define the light on the legs. 12:57 Wed Feb 11

Updated I wonder if this has any difference... 19:44, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten ear pink a bit-- 19:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. 21:22, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the lighter parts of the image- I'm having issues really seeing the shading too, but I think it's a good darkness, so tweaking your highlights and/or lighter areas (if you don't use highlights, which aren't mandatory) might help with this.

Updated Huh.. I wonder if anyone else see's the difference in this magnificent cat <3 21:06, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps lighten her up a teeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyyyyy bit so that we can see the shading? 09:08, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Updated It looks better on my screen :P 13:32, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt L 5) ~ For Approval
I tried to add some texture, but it failed miserably so I just got rid of that. I've never done a leader before; comments? There's some waste under her hind-quarter, which I will remove on my next upload. 21:43, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The tail shading is leaking. (i think bluestar is cursed) 21:48 Wed Feb 11

Define the earpink a bit. Splendid job, Sorrel. =) 23:05, February 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on her legs. Also, smooth it out in a lot of places, like the legs and the tail. 09:11, February 12, 2015 (UTC)

I see a couple of errors besides the waste on the lower rump: There is a grey pixel on her right eye, there is waste on the nicked ear, and waste on her whiskers and the neck. 19:52, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 22:33, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the earpink a bit? 03:53, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it. 09:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, I think it's alright. 15:07, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail. 03:35, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the scar just a tad? I can barely see it. It may just be my monitor, so feel free to disregard this if you think its alright.-- 21:13, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reups sure 00:59, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a tad more. 16:24, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 23:52, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on <== leg and smooth out the shading on the tail a little bit more. 14:17, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine, imho, and I'd rather not, because I've got leg shading on several layers. 22:24, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

I think adding a very dull highlight will help there. *shrugs* 13:22, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reups 18:38, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Eagle Feather (Ki) - For Approval
Yes, the shading is black. I don't feel like tinting it since it's not mandatory and it doesn't look green.

Define the shading, and maybe smooth it out a little. 15:51 Fri Feb 13

Re-uploaded.

If you zoom into the bottom of the picture, you can see waste at the front foot. 19:47, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope I got it... that's odd, though...there's never waste on my images with how I have my layers...

Yeah, that is strange, but you got it off. 20:01, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

Mind defining the shading on the ---> front leg? I can barely see any. This looks great =).-- 22:31, February 13, 2015 (UTC)

I doesn't need defining, but it could use a little blur. 00:57, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think it needs defining, as it looks like there is only a smidge of shading on the leg. The paw shading could use a blur, but the leg shading needs to be defined. 13:56, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Great Spirits, make up my mind already you nerds. I cannot feel my hands because of how cold it is.

The back leg tells me the light source is coming from <== whereas the rest tells me it's coming from the other way around, could you fix that? 14:16, February 19, 2015 (UTC

Re-uploaded. That doesn't even seem important but okay it's a back foot where you can't even tell but okay.

Getting a tad sassy, are we? xD Could you darken the head shading a tad? If you think it's fine though, then don't do anything to it. He's a handsome little thing. =) 23:14, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

I was more confused than anything, not sassy. I'd rather not darken the head shading, as I think it might clash with the ear pink a bit too much- I don't put my ear pink below the shading.

I think the shading on the legs could be defined. If you prefer not to, that's fine. 09:13, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. And did some other stuff.

Furled Bracken (Ancient) ~ For Approval
Tiger does it again. =P 03:15, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. Very pretty~ =) nice job. 03:42, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks 03:48, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Eye depth could still be defined, try switching the place here the dark part of the eye starts. 11:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Mew 15:26, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws a tad. 15:46 Sat Feb 14

Re-upped 16:06, February 14, 2015 (UTC)

Could you give the shading a bit more depth? 00:55, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 01:01, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define your lightsource? Some paws are telling me it's coming from <== and the tail is telling me it's coming from ==> really pretty ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:00, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped 04:17, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

The lightsource still looks off. Please clarify the direction the light is coming from. 16:23, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it fine. It looks like it's coming from the left. However, the shading on the tail looks like it's leaking. 16:27 Tue Feb 17

Not really, considering the chest, tail, and a couple legs say left, and the head and another leg say right. I'd say it still needs a little clarifying. :/ 16:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have another opinion or a redline of what you want it to look like? I'm a bit confused. 23:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Lol I apologize ahead of time, this is a very rough one since I did it very quickly..here's the redline of what I'd probably do if I was doing that lightsource. Again it's very rough, and you can style it your own way. Hope it helps. =) 03:57, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for neglecting this. 00:58, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Petal (Ro) (Star) ~ For Approval
She's a beauty :p comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:29, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Simply lovely! Add a  bit of shading to her side maybe? 15:01, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Um, that is a bit vague, I don't get what you mean. I added shading to her side as the light is coming from ==> there. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 15:06, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading? It looks dark on my phone, but if you think it's fine then leave it. she's pretty 15:52 Sun Feb 15

On my phone it looks fine. 16:53, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Looks perfect on my iPad and Mac,don't change anything yet! 🐈 -- 17:26, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little bit. 22:52 Sun Feb 15

Re-ups thanks guys :) ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:45, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Define the Earpink, please? 17:06, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Earpink looks fine, but you could lighten the shading on the ears. Also The Fox Girl you might want to move your signature into a template - it takes up a lot of space on the editor. 21:01 Mon Feb 16 2015

I'm not sure how to fix the ear pink... I put the layer above my shading so I can't Lighten it there. And I color picked from her other images. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 05:31, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Simply beautiful! Maybe do a highlight of the ears, that works for me. she is my baby great job!

Re-uploaded Thanks ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:34, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define nose pink a tad it looks kinda black :/ -- 14:39, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine, and I'm not changing it. 15:19, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes on the main body are a bit too pixely compared to her other images...the ones on her queen are a bit smoother as well, and I'm pretty sure that's the side you should be matching..

Re-uploaded I tried, if you guys think it's still pixely, then inform me. 04:37, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Talon (Loner) ~ For Approval
Two new cats for approval on the approval page within a minute XD Comments? I'm proud of this. 08:34, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws? He's handsome. 13:27, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you~ 13:33, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define ear pink, other than that he's gorgeous! 😃 -- 17:30, February 15, 2015 (UTC)

I color picked from his other images, and I can see it fine. But thank you =) 03:32, February 16, 2015 (UTC)

Could you blur/smudge(whatever you did with this one) the neck shading a tad? This is a gorgeous image, well done Burntclaw. =) 23:09, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you. 05:00, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Ancient) ~ For Evaulation
First time trying! Comments?✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 09:45, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Your title needs to say "Shy Fawn Ancient - For Evaluation" since you're kit. Very nice for a first charart. :) Define the shading on the chest and face, and erase a bit of the shading on the right side of the left front leg. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 09:50, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Very pretty :) Define the shading on the tail a bit. 09:55, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Also, you needed to reserve it. I've done it for you this time, but you must keep in mind that you have to reserve something before posting it in the future. 09:58, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, I've never contributed much with this page so i don't know anything 0.0 sorry for mistakes everywhere! :P✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 11:41, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

@Jayie this is not the first time for me to do a charart tbh, but it's the first time for me to do an actual character...✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 04:34, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

Ok. I suggest that you might want to darken the shading. Everywhere. (Besides the neck, face, chest, and front paws." I would also brighten up the shading one the hind paw aswell.   20:41, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tongue. 14:08, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Ok. There is waste everywhere. Can you fix that? 14:49, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Stream, remember to comment here when you re-upload your image. Define the shading on the haunch. Also, the shading is leaking from the haunch as well, you might want to fix that. 09:12, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups.✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 12:57, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

So so so sorry about the waste and the comment thing! I was in a huge hurry when I uploaded this pic :'(✫Stream on the  Dark side of the moon☽ 12:57, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still seeing waste everywhere..especially around the tail and on the tip of the tail. 20:48, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Ancient) ~ For Approval
i know there should be texture i will add that in the next upload <span style="">15:35 Tue Feb 17

Blur and lighten up the shading, looking good ^^. 15:42, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">15:47 Tue Feb 17

Blur/smudge the shading some more, it still looks pretty hard-edged. Also, have the texture flow more with the direction of the fur. Nice job =) 20:04, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading a bit? It looks really dark. Nicely done! =3 23:48, February 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add more depth to her eyes ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 11:04, February 18, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">21:59 Wed Feb 18

Lighten up the shading quite a bit more, it's really dark. <span style="">1:54 Thu Feb 19

re-ups i just spotted the waste under her i'll fix that in a sec <span style="">12:35 Thu Feb 19

the shading is still very hard edged, especially on the haunch. 12:36, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

if i blur it any more its going to look gross <span style="">12:56 Thu Feb 19

Lighten up the shading, and it still could be smoothed out. Also, define the texture, I can barely tell it's there. 14:13, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Curve the texture a bit more to try and match with the flow of fur, particularly when it transitions from one body part to the other. The direction of light is confusing as well due to the head and tail shading. Nice job! 00:03, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

tbh i'm just going to redo the shading and the texture <span style="">00:05 Fri Feb 20

reups the shading is now smudged, will darken texture if necessary <span style="">01:50 Fri Feb 20

The texture looks a bit thick and blotchy, try using an airbrush and run over the image until it looks like texture. Lighten up the shading too. 03:16, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

The white splotches looks like it is above the shading layer. could you put it back underneath so it looks more.. shaded? and tbh, I think the hind leg still needs to be smudged or blurred more. 21:49, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups <span style="">02:55 Sat Feb 21

The texture is still blotchy... Try using a paintbrush then adjusting the opacity. The shading is very hardedged, try smudging the edges with a hard edged smudge tool. 10:32, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Could I have a second opinion on the shading? It looks fine to me and I really dont want to smudge it more <span style="">16:58 Sat Feb 21

I think it could use more smudging. Also, can you define the depth of the shading a bit? =) 00:00, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Just to ask, what color of shading are you using? 04:42, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading that is on the paw that is overlapped? (sorry if that sounded confusing) 09:10, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Burntclaw, please smooth out the shading some more. Right now, it still looks rather hard-edged.-- 09:40, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

I'm using black shading. I think it looks fine. <span style="">18:02 Sun Feb 22

also it really feels like you guys are just repeating the same comment to smudge the shading, i'd appreciate it if you didn't do that? it feels like you're yelling at me and i don't like it <span style="">18:05 Sun Feb 22

I'm sorry, I don't think it's fine. It looks quite paint-brushy and splotchy. Also, we aren't yelling at you, we are just telling you what you can do to improve the image. 00:33, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think if you added some light to the chest and smoothed out the haunch shading, you'd be good. You don't need to smudge the shading, nor tint it- neither choice is required by PCA and these are things that people just like to do. Also, to everyone else, please keep in mind that too many comments saying "I agree" and things like that might be overwhelming to a user, so the overload of comments saying to smooth out the shading could easily have been taken as ganging up on someone because of the amount of people agreeing/saying the same thing.

Frecklewish (Alt KP) ~ For Approval
Hi, here is my adorable fluffball w/ mascara on(it was completely intentional xD). Now I can't remember if she's supposed to have a collar with this one or not.. :/ Let me know. Comments? 00:32, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a bit, other than that she is lovely! P.S Love the mascara! :P ~ 00:53, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

She wasn't shown with a collar, so she doesn't get it for this alt. Also, smudge the patches with a hard-edged brush, like the alt MC.

Re-uploaded. Lol thank you. And I had smudged them already, but I smudged them a bit more for ya. 02:40, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Please crop the image- there's too much extra spacing between the edge of the image and the lineart.

Re-uploaded. Huh, I don't even know how that happened. I just use the blanks as they are..maybe when I was making some practice-kittypet it got screwed up somehow..whoops. 03:00, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back. I like her. <span style="">12:31 Thu Feb 19

Add a little more shading at the <-- leg. 20:33, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Gia. =) 23:01, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Where's your light source coming from? 03:19, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

It's coming from the left. I know, the back shading is making it look confused..it was very faint, but I defined it for Gia. I can try to even out the other half of the back shading, or I could do away with it. Either way is fine with me, just tell me what to do. 14:54, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

Nah I was just a tad confused about the source, but now I can see it. :3 10:28, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Although, could you define the shading on the ears? 14:05, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Lol 'kay. =3 Phew, it's been a busy weekend.. 17:45, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Such a beauty! I think there is an uncolored pixel on the leg over there --> or is that just me. ♥-- 20:58, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Dawn River (Ancient) ~ For Approval
I hate this pattern 14:52, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Blue out the shading on the cheek a little more. 20:37, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reups That's a typo meaning for me to blur it, right? Well, I smudge my shading, so I smudged it a bit more instead. 22:19, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, its a typo. Sorry for the confusion. 22:28, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Could you lighten it up a teeeeeny bit on the haunch it looks a little bit dark how did you even do this 09:33, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

reups I have no idea 10:59, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

smudge the shading on the front leg closest to us, like where it bends <span style="">02:23 Sat Feb 21

Is it just my eyes, Or is there a black patch/very dark shading on her back or something? 09:16, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading everywhere just a bit, it looks really dark.-- 09:38, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Looks fine to me^^ but if you wanna lighten it a bit, go for it. We all have different monitors, and they all show different things. 17:59, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Mistlekit (TPB) (ki) - For Approval
Kiscicaaa :) 15:10, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading one the front legs. 20:32, February 19, 2015 (UTC)

Which of the front legs do you mean? Although maybe define it on both? 03:00, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think they mean on the legs, not one the legs, which would indicate both. Jayie Unwritten words~ 06:18, February 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading could be defined everywhere. 09:09, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

While you're at it, define the ear pink on ==> that ear. 09:15, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly i think the earpink is fine, i can see it clearly. It just has shading on it. mind smuding the shading just a tad on the ---> paw? 09:39, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups I also redid the stripes cuz' i didn't like them,and now she looks horribe :p 20:47, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Shellheart (Ki) ~ For Approval
Hi there. <span style="">17:31 Sat Feb 21

Darken fur color a bit -- 19:10, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

I think it matches with the other images. ^^ 19:13, February 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. <span style="">19:37 Sat Feb 21

'Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:21 Sun Feb 22

Should he be more ragged-furred? On his StarClanner his tail, legs, and everything are pretty ragged..not sure if this should be like that though, so if it's fine Hawky, ignore me. :3 He's handsome, nice job^^ 17:55, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

The Old She-cat ~ For Approval
My first rogue image! too many kits lately. I tried getting it similarly coloured to Thistleclaw's manga alt, as in the book, they are the exact same colour.-- 01:53, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading and light on the tail and legs. 01:54, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload -- 02:04, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. 04:38, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the belly a bit. 04:39, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere and the light on the tail 09:08, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

says shes got a tooth sticking out, can you add it? 12:20, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart a bit where the tufts of fur stick out from the base lineart? It looks a tiny bit out of place. Also, I think the body shading itself is fine and doesn't really need defined.

Reupload sorry I didn't answer earlier, my internet crashed >< The tooth sticking out is on her right, as put in her description.-- 22:05, February 22, 2015 (UTC)

And since we see her left, it wouldn't be visible here, I'm pretty sure... Can you define the shading on the back legs (as in the back of the image, not the cat herself).. Like, this one and this one because I am terrible at describing things and I think it's her right legs? I just woke up from sleep so I'm kinda half-coherent I apologize.

Reupload -- 02:05, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs. 05:00, February 23, 2015 (UTC)

I define anymore on her left leg her right back leg really doesn't have light. Does it need to have some light or just lighten the shading?-- 06:51, February 23, 2015 (UTC)