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Dappletail (Star) - Redone
18:08 Mon Mar 25 2019

Could you upload the changes elsewhere? I'm still seeing the old version. ​​​​

Looks stunning when I checked the file history! Anywho, expand the shading on the paws, and is it possible to blur/smudge the shading since it looks a little hard-edged? If not it's cool. :) 22:20, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

can you make her dappled? 23:23, March 25, 2019 (UTC)

Changes. Also, she is dappled. 22:53 Tue Mar 26 2019

Could you define the dapples, then? I can't tell they're even on her pelt. ​​​

Expand the earpink down in the bigger ear- it looks cut off abruptly by the white. 23:47, March 26, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

I'd like an extension of possible, or if I could withdraw and reupload later. My mom broke her ankle and I've been helping my parents move. 23:13 Sun Mar 31 2019

That'd be fine. But to clarify, does this also include the reservations on Dappletail's other images?

I would be fine with that; the set does belong to Breezey and circumstances like what she explained are way beyond her control. I think we definitely should start being a bit more lenient when it comes to instances like Breezey's; it's not her fault that she is unable to upload right now and we shouldn't be holding that against her.

Wow! I love it! -Texas

Texas, please don't comment with non-critique. Can you smooth the shading a little bit? 15:41, 4/12/2019

Of course, no rush. Please take your time. But are you still working on this?

Tawnypelt (D) - Tweaked
I still think the "cream" is white and needs removed but oh well. Tweaked to make the gray not purple. 15:19 Mon Apr 22

hm it still looks a little purple to me 15:53, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

It was never meant to really be white to my knowledge. If it's that much of an issue, should we do what we did for Fernshade and just swap the coloring? ​​

The gray is completely desaturated. The only think I could find that fixes it was making it much lighter, in which case we need to darken the brown so it is defined enough, or making it much darker, and it won't match her pale description. And do I have permission to swap that white to something else? It's been bugging me since we first did the tortie vs. tortie/white thing. 16:14 Mon Apr 22

As long as it still bears the same placement and whatnot, I think you'll be good to go ahead and swap. It would prevent even more nominations and arguments down the road. I personally think it's fine, but I do understand what you mean and I'm fine with it being fixed, since it's been brought up multiple times. ​​

Reuploaded There we go. Its at least not white anymore. Making it more brown makes sense with her color pallet 16:57 Mon Apr 22

Reuploaded Messed with the values a little bit on the cream and gray 00:29 Tue Apr 23

its just that when you compare this image with the others in the set, i really dont see much of a difference on the gray– it still looks quite purple. could you try altering the colors of the orange/brown to see if that makes things better? 00:35, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded So the saturation is knocked completely down on the gray, so I'm not sure there's much that could be done without completely changing the colors to silver and I don't think I would be allowed to do that. The others will be redos. Unless there's still files with the colors completely separated, they wouldn't just be tweakable. 16:12 Thu Apr 25

Doesn look purple anymore to me Malina457 (talk) 17:37, April 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded Toned down the cream 18:36 Fri Apr 26

Since she's a pale tortoiseshell, any chance you could make her colors lighter?

Reuploaded 13:11 Sat Apr 27

Thrushpelt (TC) - Redone
I'm not really happy with this one but I tried. OA was Atelda. 15:45, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Tweaked the colouring and removed waste. 16:22, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is leaking away from the lineart near where the tail touches the body. Can you define the light on < this leg as well and smooth out the shading on the opposite leg? 22:49, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Messed around with the shading hopefully it looks better. 10:42, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Changed the eyes again. 11:17, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Which way is your light coming from? It hits the left of the face but the right of the legs and tail  15:56, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

if its a white flash, shouldnt the white be reduced? 16:38, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is still leaking near the tail tip. I can provide a redline if needed? 21:59, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - It's alright, I think I got the shading. I reduced the white flash to something like Ravenpaw's and flipped the shading on the face. Hopefully, this is better c:  11:56, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth out the shading on the main body? 14:07, April 28, 2019 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt.DF) ~ Tweaked
Darken to make black. I colour-picked from the elder alt.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:38, April 27, 2019 (UTC)