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Dew Nose (Hunter) ~ For Approval
this did not turn out how I wanted it; rip Minkclaw Winter is coming. 21:59, October 4, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading Malina457 (talk) 22:27, October 4, 2018 (UTC)Malina

The black spots on her other images do not look as round and blotchy as these do. Try smuding them a bit into the fur.  SPO OKY FI RE  22:47, October 4, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 18:20, October 5, 2018 (UTC)

can you blur the stripes a tiny bit? I love that they are more sharm than most art I see, but they (with my wird eyes,) are hard to look at, Owlbite, Im Owlbite, Okay? Good 23:18, October 5, 2018 (UTC)

They're suppose to be sharp per this.. Can I get another opinion on that please? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 07:54, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

Hmm, it does appear the stripes in the other images seem more blurred, or maybe they're just thicker than the ones here.  SPO OKY FI RE  14:53, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

I also agree. The stripes on the other images appear slightly blurred. Not too much, though. 18:09, October 6, 2018 (UTC)

also, this may be your prefrance to do it like this, but on the others, the tail tip is white, and it looks to me, on yours, a splotch of white on the tail, it dosent reach the bottom if that makes sence. ~RAR =^.,.^= Im spoopy kittan! 00:39, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

The shading seems off on the white tail tip and looks like it's leaking a bit. Also the stomach looks a bit flat - other than that this is cute. 06:06, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

There's no shading on the stomach.. That's because that's the shading on the tail, I used red. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 12:04, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Would you be able to at least add a small bit of shading to show depth with the fur lineart? It looks extremely flat. The stripes are also a bit softer on the kit image than they are here, and I also agree with Owlbite's comment about the tail white; it should cover the entire tail tip. ​

Re-Ups, I redid the shading. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:12, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white tail-tip, define it on the head and add some to the ears. The ears themselves wouldn't have no shading, since ears are a 3D object and there would definitely be something there to show the inner parts of the ears. Also, try and give some shape to the neck shading- I'm not really seeing any, when it should flow with the curves of the cat a little better and go up onto the top of the head with this source.

There's also shading leaking above the shoulder. 23:26, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

Cloud, could you headline what you mean on the ears? Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:50, October 7, 2018 (UTC)

I can't, since I'm honestly unsure how... but basically look at Gooseberry's hunter image for an idea, since this one uses a similar light source. You see how there's shading in the ear area? Unless that's not what you meant and I'm just stupid. ​​​​​​

I do understand actually, the image and Patch showed me where exactly it should be. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 11:03, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, hopefully this looks better. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 11:28, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

There's shading leaking around the tail and below the chin. 13:59, October 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 13:16, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail and face a bit. 23:05, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 14:50, October 10, 2018 (UTC)

Possibly make the eyes a bit lighter?

14:55, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups Minkclaw Winter is coming. 18:22, October 12, 2018 (UTC)

Make the black spots a bit darker, I'm not sure if I can see them.jxs 00:57, October 14, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

smooth out your shading a lot

I think the black spots are fine as I was just told to lighten and smooth them. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 04:07, October 14, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, Where are you seeing that it needs to be smoothed out? I went and smoothed some parts so hopefully this is better. Minkclaw Winter is coming. 21:55, October 15, 2018 (UTC)

Personally, I don't think the shading needs to be smoothed out. However, there is waste under the back feet.  SPO OKY FI RE  22:30, October 15, 2018 (UTC)

I still think the facial shading still needs to be smoothed out, or whatever that darker patch is

That's a black spot there. I think it's fine. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 09:32, October 16, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry, not so much on the face, but around the chin/neck. I don't believe that's a black patch.

Shading is leaking on the hind paw. You can do things,   or you can  do them right.   All it takes is a little   <span style="color:gold;font-family:Nothing You Could Do;font-size:18pt;text-shadow:darkslategray 2.5px 1.5px 1px;">patience.  22:07, October 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 03:22, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

there's supposed to be a black patch on her muzzle (see warrior image). the stripes should also br smoothed out to match the stule o her other images

Darken the stripes a little perhaps? And maybe thicken them. These appear lighter and thinner than on her other images.

15:26, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

The colors and thickness match the kit since it came first. ^to the black spots as well.since this is facing a different direction there wouldn't be a black spot on the face. The style of the stripes do match, if I remember correctly they don't have to match 100%. Could I get a second opinion on the atripes, please. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 16:59, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

imo the stripes appear darker and thicker on the kit like Patch said. For the black patch on the muzzle, I don't think Mink should add it since it's not shown on the kit or es (unless I'm blind which is a possibility - this pattern is hard to see). And idk where the black patches went prior, but there needs to some at least on the lower back, upper tail, the front paw closest to us, and on the front leg closest to us. And there's shading leaking below the chin. Sorry this pattern is giving you so much trouble! 21:24, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

I realize I forgot to turn the black layer back on rip me. I'll re-up on those in a bit. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 22:18, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Add some white to her nose too. If it's there, define it.

22:20, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, how much thicker should these stripes be? <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 22:26, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

I'd say as thick as the lower two haunch stripes is a safe bet. 22:36, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Nice. May wanna work on shading, Dew Nose looks very dark to me.jxs 01:35, October 18, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

The shading is fine.. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:39, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Likewise, the shading darkness is dark enough. Any darker it would be confused as the black markings, and any lighter would not show depth. 02:25, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Sure, it's dark enough, but it's not smoothed out enough, especially near the front side where the neck/front legs are. Please smooth it out. If you are going to dismiss comments please provide a reason instead of just saying "it's fine", because that's quite disrespectful to commenters. And what i mean by stripe style: look at the kit (and basically all of her other images), her stripes are smoother/darker/thicker than how you did them here. Sure, it doesn't have to match 100% but I'd be fine if it didn't look pretty obvious at first glance. Also, I agree that the stripes should be thicker, as the OA of the warrior image. Last note: there's waste under the chin.

is this dark enough for the stripes? <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 20:38, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Looks good

Re-Ups <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 20:31, October 19, 2018 (UTC)

This looks a lot better. Can you add a few more stripes to her face from her cheek to her chin?  SPO OKY FI RE  21:56, October 19, 2018 (UTC)

The kit doesn't have them, neither does the es. I just looked. The warrior has them but since its not the first one I don't think I need to add them here. I can if more users say I need too but I really don't see the need to. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:15, October 19, 2018 (UTC)

I agree with Mink. There's no need for extra stripes on the face. In my opinion, this is very close to getting approved. Good job!Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:32, October 19, 2018 (UTC)

There's still some waste beneath the chin. 01:09, October 20, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 01:28, October 20, 2018 (UTC)

I still think there should be some black on the muzzle. if you look closely at the kit there is black leaking to the right side of the muzzle. Not to mention that both the early settler and the warrior both have black on the right side of the muzzle. (for the early settler it might be shading but it doesn't really look like it is)

I looked at the kit and I don't see it.. I think it's just being nitpicky on tiny dash that leaks over.. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 04:00, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

Not only does the kit have it, but also the early settler and the warrior. This is not a matter of being nitpicky. There is clearly black on the right side of the kit that isn't just a "tiny dash" (of course if you still odn't see it i'll gladly highlight it). And as the OA of the warrior I know what I'm talking about because I looked at all of her images. Sure the black can be shrunk on the warrior but the fact is it's still there on the kit.

And if that is a black ear (furthest from us) the black should be removed, or if that is shading you need to define the light there because it looks like a black ear. You've pretty much dismissed every single comment and it's frankly getting irritating. What is the point of the approval page if you are just going to dismiss every comment directed at your image?

I'm not dismissing every comment. I'm only putting in my opinion, I shouldn't get scolded for doing that. The ear is shading, I'll add the black on the muzzle as well. If you could, highlight where your seeing the black as I don't see any when I look at the Kit and ES. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 07:41, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

https://www.ezimba.com/work/181021C/ezimba19474540615000.png Just don't add that much black like the warrior, but it should be there. Pretty much every comment on your image was met with "it's fine..." or something, which does come across as dismissing, to the point where I was somewhat hesitant to comment. The thing is the point of the approval page is to accept critique, and there's no point if you refuse to act on any comment. And don't forget to add light on that ear because it looks black to me.

I'll upload tomorrow when I wake up, its late right now. Initially that its fine was to the shading in which they wanted me to lighten it and if I did I'd have to had define the depth of it. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 10:34, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

Oh yes, that ear. When you fix it, remember not to make the earpink too dark nor too bright. Maybe blur the tabby stripes a little less?Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:26, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

Mink, just as a head's up, Fox was one of the artists for Dew Nose; it would be fairly disrespectful to disregard what she's telling you. She is 100% correct when she states it does seem like you're blowing off comments. ​

There is no ear pink in the far ear, I'm gonna have to ask for a second opinion on the tabby stripes because I'd have to go and redo them then. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 22:31, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

I like the tabby stripes as they are!  SPO OKY FI RE  22:33, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups, thanks Hawky! <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw   Winter is coming.  22:48, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

Lioneye (unknown) ~ CBA
unsure.

15:24, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Man, someone needs to get poor Lioneye approved! xD I think this looks really, really great. The shading needs be defined around her chin/jawline and perhaps on her lower chest some more.  SPO OKY FI RE  15:34, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thank ye.

17:35, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

I think there should be 1 or 2 very slim stripes over the paw...pads...fingers...digits lineart to match the other images. 23:28, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. like so?

00:08, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

there's like a stripe that's a bit oversmudged. if you're confused i can provide a screenshot. also no i have no idea how i even managed to get the original approved. 01:15, 10/18/2018 ​ 01:15, 10/18/2018 ​

Define your shading. Lioneye needs some more shading. You removed too much.jxs 01:38, October 18, 2018 (UTC)Jaystick145

Patch has done this style of shading numerous times for her images. The shading placement is fine. 02:21, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think that was the stripe you were talking about, but yeah if not you can screenshot it.

14:10, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Nice work, Patch. Do you think this is ready for a CBA or do you need more time?Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:34, October 19, 2018 (UTC)

Potato, it is against our guideliness to ask for a CBA. Only senior warriors and above can CBA an image, and normally senior warriors do not CBA their own images. Also, please do not comment on an image unless it a critique. 00:59, October 20, 2018 (UTC)

Blur shading. She looks amazing, Patch.Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:20, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

The shading doesn't need blurring. Many images use this same style, and it is more than acceptable. ​​

CBA? 00:53, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

Alder (Hunter) ~ For Approval
*cries* 22:40, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

This is seriously one of the most difficult patterns and I applaud you for taking it on! xD I think the shading is far too dark, it takes away from each color of the pattern, and it makes the base color look gray (which on her other images appears to be white).  SPO OKY FI RE  22:44, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Light then shading as Hawk said, as well as maybe smoothen out the shoulder shading. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 23:06, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

Reups I have a phobia of lightening shading. 23:21, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

I'd also like to add that the base is a very pale gray as Jayce said on one of the other submissions, but I can add more white and mix it up a bit if needed. I'm just going with the flow for this pattern lol 23:26, October 17, 2018 (UTC)

It looked like off-white to me on the other images but very pale gray definitely makes sense. It may have just been my computer screen. ^^ I think there could be a little more white on her shoulder and haunch though, like her warrior image.  SPO OKY FI RE  00:14, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 16:34, October 18, 2018 (UTC)

Looking nice. Add a few more speckles in the bare spots.Heyoitpotater (talk) 23:35, October 19, 2018 (UTC)

If you are referring to the white patches, they're supposed to be that per the other images. I think. It's a bit hard to see, but I believe the white is on top of the brown freckles with some poking through. 01:07, October 20, 2018 (UTC)

Reups Fiddled around with the flecks regardless. 03:58, October 20, 2018 (UTC)

Could you soften the flecks a bit, his others images have softer ones. <span style="color:#00ffff; text-shadow: 2px 2px 1px #00006f; font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:18px;">Minkclaw Winter is coming. 04:09, October 20, 2018 (UTC)

Reups 04:23, October 20, 2018 (UTC)

Still looks absolutely amazing. Maybe remove a few flecks of of the most notable hind leg?Heyoitpotater (talk) 22:18, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry if it seems like I'm disregarding your comment, Potato, but I think the flecks on her hind leg look fine. What do you think, Vec?  SPO OKY FI RE  22:22, October 21, 2018 (UTC)

As the OA of her other images (that bear the master pattern), the flecks are good as they are and honestly don't need changing. Could you possibly dull the highlights a tad, though? Not sure if it's my laptop screen (since I barely use it), but something's looking kind of shiny. ​​

Reups They're not highlights, but rather they're the white spots. I wasn't sure how you layered the other images, Jayce, so I just put the white spots as one of the top-ish layers, but I could see what you meant. I smoothed them about and dulled them a bit, so maybe that'll help. 00:58, October 22, 2018 (UTC)

I could toss you the file for the warrior if you'd like, Vec. Just shoot me your email and you can see the madness for yourself. ​

Uh yes please and thank you 01:11, October 22, 2018 (UTC)