Warriors Wiki talk:Characters/Archive 95

Thrushtalon ~ Silver Nomination
I'm glad everyone is working hard to process all these new but minor characters. Comments? 03:58, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 00:01, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

You might want to clarify the beginning of the passage as it's rather confusing by focusing in on Frecklewish at first. 00:28, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Done. CBA? 00:40, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Vote's up! 01:48, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Rainfall ~ Silver Nomination
I wrote the history this time. A search of words is the only reason I like ebooks. Comments? 03:58, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 00:01, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

The first sentence could and probably should be broken up into multiple sentences as it is very overwhelming. However, the last few sentences of the history are written really well; nice job. 00:31, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Done. CBA? 00:40, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Vote's up! 01:48, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Sagewhisker ~ Silver Nomination
I'm going rogue! XD I fixed her history and quotes, and it's way overdue for a silver nomination. 00:01, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Holy crap, this is awesome! Try and eliminate phrases such as "first seen", "was mentioned" and other phrases outlined in the FRQ for PC. You also might want to go through a brief grammar check throughout the article as there are several errors. I can help with that if you'd like. But overall, this is fantastic! 00:36, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I fixed up the grammar mistakes I can find but if anyone else finds any can you fix it or let me know? 01:18, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 01:48, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Vote's up! 00:18, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Spiketail - Silver Nomination
At least if the minor ones are done and out of the way, we can focus on the major ones.

CBA? 23:59, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Vote's up! 00:14, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Perchpaw (MV) ~ Silver Nomination
I just wrote up his article (thanks to whoever added the quotes). Comments? 20:33, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think there is a good quote of Appledusk calling to his apprentice. If his practising battle moves instead of collecting moss his in trouble? That might be a good main quote, or at least added to the quotes list. 22:24, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Updated Yeah, I think so, too. I added it to his quotes list. 12:54, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 00:48, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Vote's up! 00:09, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitfur ~ Silver Nomination
His expectations were too harsh. Comments?? 21:20, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

I fixed a typo. 22:16, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? 00:48, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Vote's up! 00:09, April 11, 2015 (UTC)