Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 33

Mist where Sunlight Shimmers - Approved
well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it?? *santa pool*  07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --Rainwhisker 09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --  Icy -chan  20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  pool*  07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.-- Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also Sandy   Talk   16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  pool*  07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --  Icy -chan  21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better?? *Ivy pool*  06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look right, make it look like this. Also, maybe make the end of the tail a little bit darker than the rest of the tail (just use the burn tool a couple of times), so that it shows the shading more. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *angel's  bells*  06:38, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks need to be a little lighter. Other than that, great job! -- Snow star Leaf-bare is here! 12:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded i think it's strange...-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:24, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... the mud streaks look too green still and need to be slightly thinner I think. I'd personally use a size 5 brush and blur well. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:44, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

reploadedi started it all over... -- *Ivy jingle jingle!!* 07:40, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink, maybe try changing the ear pink to a lighter or darker color, or making it thicker. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:07, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:33, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

It looks to hot pink. When you're picking your color, go to the red, and choose a salmony color--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:47, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:59, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:00, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy  wishes you a great Christmas! 13:34, December 21, 2009 (UTC)