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Sorrelstripe (Queen) - For Approval
Time to slink back into cat art hell now I've fixed my programs :) Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Reshiram. I Am Elegance. 15:58, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lessen the belly shading some?  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:25, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I don't really like to just say it's fine much when possible but I feel like the belly shading is ok, my minor character queen has roughly the same amount. I'll do it no problem though if someone else agrees with you, Mink. ;; Squidward Plays All  Star. I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:07, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

meh it looks fine to me, sorry mink. 18:18, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

The base appears lighter than the apprentice, which I believe is first in the set? 18:28, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you center the pupil on the -> eye <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:13, May 27, 2019 (UTC)

You still have some time left, but are you still working? 17:27, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I'm gonna try and re-up either tonight or tomorrow probably <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 19:10, May 31, 2019 (UTC)

reups i tried this was a very weird process <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 23:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Onestar (Warrior Alt) - For Evaluation
Im not very sure if this can be made but I saw it under the characters that need art. I tried to make it as similar as possible.

Sorry if I did make a mistake of making this, im very new to the project so here it is... Kezii (talk) 01:43, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

By the way I also used FireAlpaca if there needs to be changes. Kezii (talk) 01:45, May 26, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Welcome to the project! You are able to make this i believe, but since this is your first Chaart, this is for Evaluation I'm pretty sure, Don't thumb your images or align them (|thumb) (|left or |right), Put the image before any flavor text you wanna put along with it! This should be named File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png aswell. The < eye is looking a bit gray, and shading could be defined. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:03, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I have the leader file from when I was doing this, I can email if you want? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:56, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the earpink. 13:37, May 26, 2019 (UTC)

I tried all the suggestions, fixed gray eyes, and added ear fur (to make it more similar to the alt leader) Kezii (talk) 23:14, May 29, 2019 (UTC)Kezii

Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into source mode and remove the |thumb. Also avoid thumbing by going to the file and click "Upload a new version of this file". You need to upload this as File:Onestar.warrior.alt.png, or the image won't work with the wiki's templates. The lineart also appears to be missing in some places, namely the ears and paws. Brighten up the white on both paws, and define the shading everywhere on the white. Can you also smooth out the chest shading? 00:29, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

The texture, I believe, looks a little rough. Could you smooth it out?

The hind paws should be white too, and I think the hind paw furthest from us is hidden? It should be visible. 01:14, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Oh, and I use firealpaca too so if you have any specific questions, let me know :) 01:21, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could also afford some smoothing on the hind leg closest to us. 20:55, May 30, 2019 (UTC)

idk if it’s just my phone screen, but there appears to be red around the lineart? some of it seems to be on the lineart

yeah, the colors seem to be leaking out of the lineart, and the lineart itself is red/blurred in some places. <span style="">13:33 Sat Jun 1

idk if this has been said already so sorry if it has, but some of the lineart appears to be missing. <span style="">12:58, 6/02/2019

You still have plenty of time left, but are you still working? 01:54, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blazefire (K) ~ CBA
i'm not emotionally readdddyyyy 00:04, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Smoothed the flank shading a bit 01:32, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

With how the source is (please tell me if this makes no sense) it almost feels as if the shading on the > half of the tail should be swapped to the topside, like how we swap halfway to keep a good source on StarClans sometimes

Reups Nah that makes sense. 16:42, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Cloudtail (Ki) - CBA
He gets no collar since technically I don't think he had one and he spent more of his kithood in TC than he did with Princess. ​

A few small things; there appears to be a sharp bit of shading kinda at the base of the tail; perhaps that section of shading that rounds out the bottom, which almost connects the tail shading, could be a bit more rounded to the shape of the cat, and the shading seems a bit blotchy around the front leg/neck/whatever that spot is area

Define the light on the front leg closest to us. 15:49, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

CBA? 14:21, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Ashheart (Ki) ~ CBA
All colors from original image. Comments? 00:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a little?

01:23, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth that bit of shading at the base of the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:11, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:55, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:52, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ashheart (W) ~ For Approval
All colors from original image. Comments? 00:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch and < front leg shading, and I feel a small touch of light on the chest would help add some depth

Reuploaded. 03:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add a little shading depth on the section of the tail furthest away from us (the top half)

Reuploaded. 02:07, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Beech Tail (k) ~ For Approval
i like... tried to match the old kit, but i don't think i did the stripes justice

Could you add some shading behind the ear (on that ear fluff), and maybe define the shading depth all throughout? 01:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups

The shading is leaking slightly away from the lineart at the base of the cheek, essentially where it meets the neck. I also believe some shading could be added to the front leg that shows along where it meets the tail, and have it recede from the back in both places it meets by a bit

reups hope i understood what you meant correctly!

Yup, that's what I meant. Extend the shading a little more to get closer to those tufts of fur that represent the back of the head and lessen the shading on the < side of the haunch, and I think you'll be close to done by then

Ashfur (TC) (W) - CBA


Define the shading just slightly on the front legs? 01:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Defining the overall shading wouldn't hurt, actually. Also, would you like the colors from the StarClan version? I'd gotten the colors from the original warrior, so everything is the same despite it being by two different people. ​​​​

I think that would help if you don't mind! 02:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reup much better! 18:02, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading depth? I also can't see the eye white that well, but that could be my screen, so feel free to ignore

reup

CBA?

Clawface (W) - CBA
will fix the scars

Could you define the depth in the eyes? ​​​

reup  02:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little? App was first approved in set (before tweaks and all), and it seems a slightly different color there

reup

i can't see the image, could you possibly reup again?

I can see it, there should be some light on the legs with you light source <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:13, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I intended for the light to be coming from above. I can try to make that more obvious  15:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

reup  15:26, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 01:52, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Doestar (W) - For Approval
Oml I thought I almost missed my chance to snag this lol. I love this pattern and I tried to follow the shading style that was going on in her set. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  03:04, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the back leg closest to us. 03:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I left that section of shading sticking out to sorta do an illusion of the bent leg, similar to this. (I admit i didnt use a ref beforehand)

Can you define/expand the tail shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added shading to the right ear as well. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:41, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the bottom of the < front paw?

Brightheart (W) - CBA
totally haven't had this done for over a month and a half eheheh nooppee   03:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading in general? I really have to squint to see it. 03:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 18:12, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

The hind paw furthest from us is unfilled. 22:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i is a dumb   23:58, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the white <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:51, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:07, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (W) - CBA
mlady 03:44, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Defien the shading on the black, and the depth on the silver. 03:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Thin the dorsal stripe on the tail a touch^^ Looks nice :)

reuploaded thank you!!! 14:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading depth? 22:30, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Can you add light to the legs <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:15, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded  14:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? Very nicely done^^ 20:08, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Crowfeather (K) ~ CBA


Could you define the shading overall slightly? 17:40, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

CBA?

Cloversplash (W) - For Approval
Comments? I love that clover leaf. 03:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

She's dark brown, I'm v sure the splash should be clover shaped. It should probably match what the old one shows. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading needs to be smoothed out around the chest/legs and there is a bit of waste by the tail 03:57, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It says shaped like a clover leaf, not a clover itself. I'll fix the base and shading tomorrow *decides to steal Loudbellys coloring*. 04:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

a clover leaf is a clover lmfao, either way it should resemble the shape of a clover. Shouldn't the coloring match the old one??? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with mink :/

04:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't the clover technically the whole plant, and then a clover leaf is an individual leaf? I'm not sure, but Potato might have a point. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  04:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

no, lmao. the shape on the muzzle doesn't even resemble clover leaf, I said that this should match the colors and design of the old one <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:59, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I know what you were saying, I was only arguing about the "clover leaf isn't a full clover" thing. Anywho, Potato I think there's waste on the actual lineart of the tail, as well as near it like Ty pointed out. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  05:07, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

didnt we aree that all iamges should match the old one or whatever 12:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

If that's true, I'm fixing it right now. 13:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded So I googled a clover leaf and what I got was a full clover, so I matched it to best of my ability. 13:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I'm going to be the unpopular one here, but I think Potato and Jose were actually correct. It should be one of the leaves, not the entire plant. It explicitly says "a clover leaf", and if you look it up... you get things like a three or four leaf clover, meaning that a "clover leaf" is singular. You were correct in your statements, Potato and Jose. Please go and change the marking back to how you had it, but perhaps shrink it just a little bit. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded  16:21, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

It says that the white flash is on her nose, and this looks like it's on her forehead. Could you move it down so it touches the top of the nose? Also, can you curve the haunch shading to match its shape? 16:27, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you make the shape wider and kind of heart shaped. These are clover leaves for reference. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded me tries  16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

You could do something like this maybe. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:10, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:48, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the haunch shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded arghhh  19:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

could you also define the ear pink? i cant really see it espeically on the < ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  21:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There should be light on the legs with this source <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:16, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The source is fine- this was used on two other images. See below. 13:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

While this source has been used, those other images have a lot more depth on the front legs so they're not all flat; if you could do that some, that'd be great.

Reuploaded  23:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (w) ~ CBA
i can't do torn ears... or texture rip. my gimp crashed so i had to use another program, and i'm rly unfamiliar with it so that's why this charart looks a lil blotchy

Lighten the shading half a tick? I also believe the ear should be slightly altered as well; to add back a bit more at the top, but add more gashes, just to match the other images

blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch and the top of the shoulder closest to us? <span style="">20:44 Sat Jun 1

There are three pixels of waste right above the visible hind paw that should be removed. Right between the hind paw and the <--- front paw. 22:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reups i srsly tried with that ear but wow it looks so unnatural

Recede the chest shading a little bit

reups

CBA? 02:49, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar (W) ~ For Approval
I'm still experimenting on the tint, the shading is sposed to look like it does btw <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups here we go <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:28, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading?

Also, looking at the leader, there should be at least a scar on this side.

Looking at the old warrior, he didn't get his scars til he was a deputy? I asked about that before I started and I was told he didn't have them during this time <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:38, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I also went to check his page for the cites of the scars but he doesn't have them?? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:45, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm unless a cite pops, it's fine as is. But, the haunch shading does need to be receded here, the source doesn't call for this much.

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:00, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarstar (W) ~ For Approval
here he is, apparently my laptop cut off the lineart a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:26, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a block of waste by the tail

Same comment for haunch as is on Blackstar

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:09, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Crookedstar (k) - CBA
question for his alt; how will we show his crooked jaw considering its been shown on the otherside on this blank?

I figure, he just won't have the alt? Considering it can't be seen lol could you define the head and shoulder shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:32, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I mean its definitely possible, but, I wanted to know first. reuploaded too

I think he'd get one; you can always do something like the old warrior where he was kinda grimacing. 16:34, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

You could make the bottom jaw angle upward then heavily shade it below the top jaw to give it the illusion of it being pushed farther away I think. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  17:03, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Cool, good to know for his alt, as this is just his regular

I think the ear closest to us should also be cream? 22:26, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

it is, but it might be less noticeable due to the shading?

Fine by me. ^^ CBA? 18:50, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Bramblestar (k) - CBA
baeby

CBA? 14:23, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Blizzardwing (W) - CBA
trawled the archives for instructions on how to do this; it was insane matching this one whoo

Can you add a bit of light to the legs? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:18, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I used this source on two other images, so as much as I hate to say it - it's fine. The shading is coming from that very top left corner, so you wouldn't have much light there.

You did a great job matching this. CBA? 18:51, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Bluebellkit (K) - For Approval
I think I did very well with my first white cat. Comments? 13:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

blur the shading along the tail near the point? <span style="">14:48 Sat Jun 1

Reuploaded  15:53, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Same thing as Blackstar. 22:25, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

is it possible to curve the shoulder shading some more? it looks odd with it just being a straight line. 22:55, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, its really rough <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:19, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Remove waste and define the light on the tail

Reuploaded  00:03, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blackstar (K) - For Approval
I don't think the back paw farthest from us would be showing, so I didn't add it. Anywho, comments? 13:52, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smudge the black paws a bit more? 16:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waster, and it looks almost like there's a gap in the haunch shading. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 16:39, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded the gap in the haunch shading is intentional, Baykit's source has the same gap. 16:43, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little overall. 18:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  18:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

The black on the hindleg needs to be higher. As his others show it about just about a bit of his ankle wise so both would almost cover his back paws completely.<span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:18, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  19:29, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

There's a patch of shading leaking onto < side of the haunch. 22:24, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Its leaking on the stomach too <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:44, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading 12:24, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:03, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:48, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) - CBA
ladie 15:08, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Beautiful! Define the shading depth a tad, especially on the forlegs. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  15:14, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the front paws. 15:51, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you soften her petals just the ''slightest' bit? <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 16:36, June 1, 2019 (UTC)''

reuploaded thank you j!! 16:49, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I don't think the white is supposed to go along the tail like that. I think it's just near the top. 22:22, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:42, June 1, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

How does it look if you whiten the white?

reuploaded i've lightened it as much as i can, its the shading that makes it look dark 14:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 01:55, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Blossomheart (W) - For Approval
Idk. It's been a while. 18:08, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

I think the stripes are more oddly shaped on the tail? According to the apprentice. 22:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, I know what you mean. The stripe pattern for this set is just weird in general... I redid the stripes there, so hopefully they match a little better now. 20:45, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Brightheart (K) - CBA
sweet brightkit, you will accomplish great things sweetie  18:11, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Awww she's precious. I think the ear closest to us is supposed to be ginger? 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:56, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:09, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (E) ~ For Approval
"me? i loved him." r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <19:37, 6/01/2019> ​

Could you expand the shading on the shoulder? And smooth it out just a bit on the bottom chest? 22:16, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Berryheart (W) ~ CBA
Local New Zealander Forgets How To make Cats Without Texture; More at 8 21:17, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

smudge the white a bit?

reuploaded if it looks a bit sharp in places its cuz the lineart is in the way 00:50, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Crowfeather (Alt Ki) ~ For Approval
r ♥  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <21:33, 6/01/2019> ​

Smooth out the haunch shading a bit? 22:19, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

honestly it could be smoothed out everywhere

Could you curve the shoulder shading up onto the shoulder. Right now it seems like it stops abruptly there and kinda throws it off a bit. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Briarlight (Kit) ~ For Approval
it is she 21:53, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and paw? 22:20, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 16:01, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink seems different from the other images. 01:56, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Bee (ki) ~ For approval
click here for a 100% very true bee fact 22:49, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to be long-furred. 23:00, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded not sure how that happened 00:57, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Cedarheart (Kit) ~ For Approval


01:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Yay, Thundybundy posted art. .o. Might you darken the shading a little bit and smooth out the edges of said shading?

could u extend the shading on the haunch

05:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

05:40, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading and lighten shading 05:56, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

i think its fine 06:07, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I have to agree it looks fine and super cute <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:21, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) - For Approval
I really struggled with the texture (I matched it with his apprentice), I tried to color pick it but the colors were covered in shading I think, so I don't think it came out quite right. Burnt, if you could send me the file for the apprentice that'd be greatly appreciated. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:43, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

hi, if you drop an email i could send the file to you, but unfortunately the file itself isnt going to tell you much on how to draw the texture itself. from what i vaguely remember really try to imagine each strand of fur and highlight the parts that would be in light and shade the parts that would be in dark. right now i think adding some highlights on each strand of fur will help the image, and perhaps thin it out on the shoulder 01:55, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add shading the the > ear so it doesn't look so 2D? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:22, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Deadfoot (W)- For Approval
02:11, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Beetail (W) ~ For Approval
Let's try this again. Tinystream (talk) 02:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This should match the star and the deputy. The stripes on these seems thinner, rougher, and more bunched up together. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:40, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This actually matches quite well, Mink? Could you possibly define the shading depth on the chest (near the arms)?

The stripes don't seem to cross like this on the others unless my computer screen is showin it too dark. They're also more smudged and rougher looking <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:23, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I agree with Mink. The stripes appear rougher and closer together on the other images. 18:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Dangling Leaf (K) ~ For Approval
Tinystream (talk) 02:12, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Amberclaw (W) ~ For Approval
Colors are from his previous warrior and I attempted to keep the pattern^^ 02:27, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval


With your source could you extend the shoulder shading up a tad more and maybe smooth it overall? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 09:25, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

reups

Brightflower (K) - For Approval
09:54, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

This is so cute, Finch. Can you define the paw shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 11:31, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Beetlenose (W) ~ For Approval
will be fixing shading in the earpink later, and adding shading to > ear

09:59, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reups  01:54, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i know the shading is weird looking but im still testing this type out <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 10:49, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  16:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also smooth the shading out? 17:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:24, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ambermoon (Ki) ~ For Approval
i love

12:28, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little bit of shading to the front arm that's visible, kinda just in that spot where the tail and haunch meet to a T

Can you smooth it on the tail a bit <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:51, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reups yes 01:55, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Strikestone (Ki) - For Approval
<span style="">13:22 Sun Jun 2

Shanty (Ki) - For Approval
<span style="">13:24 Sun Jun 2

maybe soften the face shading just a wee bit? looks a bit hard compared to the rest. 20:14, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (K) ~ For Approval
i'm not sure if i should put the heading as for evaluation since i already uploaded something but it got declined rip. i really want to play sa2 <span style="">13:44 Sun Jun 2

You're fine- Spooky moved you to apprentice rank cause a few years ago you were an apprentice. Smooth out the shading? 15:05, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the stripes could stand to be slightly thickened on the body, and given a slightly rougher more paintbrushy feel, like the loner and rogue

Applefur (TF) (W) - For Approval
TBH I don't remember how I did the defunct Star, which was based on the OG warrior lmao <span style="">18:36 Sun Jun 2

Could you define the shading on the ears? 22:11, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

I purposely have the earpink above the shading. We've never been required to have shading on it. If I move it I will constantly get told to define the earpink. <span style="">22:31 Sun Jun 2

Don't hate me but I'm having a hard time seeing the ear pink, so matbe define that but the shading itself there seems fine to me <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:34, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Birdy (K) ~ For Approval
18:43, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Since its described as a dark tuft, shouldn't it be similiar to like some darker haur sticking up? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:36, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Don't think so, since I've always been following the manga. 23:52, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Then in that case just ignore me loll <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (W) - For Approval
pro tip: look at the character's design before you reserve it 0.0  20:27, June 2, 2019 (UTC)

Conefoot (K) ~ For Approval


Can you define that paw shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:45, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Clovertail (K) ~ For Approval


If I'm not mistaken she needs to be Shorthair ^^ unless we've gotten a cite for her being long hair <span style="">01:08 Mon Jun 3

Reuploaded yeah rip you're right, that was just a tired me moment

Dragonfly (Ki) ~ For Approval
imaliveiswear

00:49, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

There should be a dorsal stripe and I think the stripes are more jagged. 01:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Apple Blossom (W) ~ For Approval
okay thats enough cat doodles for tonight 01:23, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

The colors dont quite seem to match her others. The stripes should be sharper and the design should probably match the style thats going on there, she seems to have side stripes more so on her other side which should probably match this side too in style <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:28, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Berryheart (Ki) - For Approval
01:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Ashfoot (W) - For Approval
Plan to mess with the shading but I wanted to get this up before I go to bed since I have work tomorrow. 01:46, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the shading a bit towards the edge to smooth it out. This is really good 👌 <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:43, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) ~ For Approval
My favorite. All colors from alt. leader. Comments? 01:55, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the facial shading some <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:43, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:59, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Gooseberry (W) ~ For Approval
I think I did a better job matching the queen this time around. 01:57, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Alder (Kit) - For Approval
hi. my naem squidwardo. i draw katz. i believe this is freegame so its time to get revenge on this pattern bc if u didnt know my first charart was one of alders set that got declined. <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 02:50, June 3, 2019 (UTC)

Add variation to the flecks, and define the gray flecks. 02:51, June 3, 2019 (UTC)