Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Longtail (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Oas are Night Shine Leggy. Tweaked for paleness. 18:22 Fri Jan 9

It doesn't look light enough compared to his other images, can you lighten both images? --Stealthfire star (talk) 22:01, January 9, 2015 (UTC) Never mind, the changes just showed. ^^--Stealthfire star (talk) 22:04, January 9, 2015 (UTC)

Uh, what's up with the ear lineart? It looks...different?

Do you want me to change it to the one on the warrior? 3:07 Mon Jan 12

It wouldn't bother me at all, tbh. The lineart near the ear just looks blurred or something. I say go for it.

Longtail (W) ~ Tweaked
Oas are Insaneular and Leggy. Tweaked for paleness. 18:22 Fri Jan 9

Waitwait, I don't get it. Why does he have two images? Just confused. :/ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 00:20, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

He got badly scratched in the eyes by a rabbit, making him permanently blind. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:06, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

Owh whoops. Stupid me :p ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 02:20, January 10, 2015 (UTC)

There are a few spots of waste near the feet, can you get rid of that please? 18:01, January 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Idk how I missed those. 1:05 Mon Jan 12

The shading is leaking on his right front paw. ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 03:19, January 12, 2015 (UTC)

Jayfeather (A) ~ Redone
OA of last version was Ducksplash; redone to thin stripes/match his other images. 23:50, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the texture on both images? ~ Burntclaw  Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:16, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit too on both images.

Jayfeather (MCA) ~ Redone
Last OA was Ducksplash, redone to thin stripes/match other images. 23:51, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reedtail (W) ~ Redone
i edited the tail because it looked really weird before but w/e 01:46, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Why are his eyes red? Just wondering if that was intentional. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 04:51, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

I think they're a darker amber/copper/orange shade, actually. Shiny Aron eyes lol

they're definitely dark orange-brown. since he doesn't have a confirmed eye colour its free game 06:40, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Reedtail (A) ~ Redone
holla 01:49, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Graywing (WC) (Ro) ~ Redone
Kind of hard edged? 03:11, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading style the same as the other images to match them a bit more? That's mostly why I nominated for it. Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:20, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is really dark. (Not sure if I'm allowed to comment on these or if i just can't tweak/redo please let me know if i did something wrong thanks) 04:41 Fri Jan 16 04:41, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shading style is not required to match. Although I think the shading on this is a bit too thick- can you thin it out?

blur it a bunch too and maybe darken his pelt a bit? this doesnt even look dark grey, more neutral. 14:13, January 16, 2015 (UTC)