Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Redscar (Star) ~ Tweaked
oa was david, tweaked to make him reddish brown. i added a little bit of extra shading to the scar because it looked out of place after i changed the colour but i can lighten/remove it if people dont want it there 01:40 Tue Sep 1

Can you define the ear pink on => ear? Nice job, by the way. 10:52, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Given it wasn't especially visible in the original, and it's in shadow due to the light source and angle of the face + the inside of the ear, I'd rather not touch it. If someone else thinks it should be defined, though, I will. tysm btw 11:35 Tue Sep 1

Could you lighten it a little bit? The medicine cat looks lighter. BCPrincess73 (talk) 14:44, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the earpink. 17:25, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded as requested by Berry.

The base colour doesn't match the medicine cat. It's too red... 23:21, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 23:28, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mounty. Tweaked to define shading and light source

Blur and lighten the shading a tad. i still say this didn't need a tweak but whatever 11:34 Tue Sep 1

tbh it passed, so that counts,. But yeah mind defining the tail shading? 11:59, September 1, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups omg I totally forgot about this!!

Smooth out the shading a tiny bit more for me, please?

Still working? 01:44, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Frog (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to add mottles. OA was Trunktail. Storm &#9835;  23:23, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, please.

Also, he needs stripes. 18:04, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

reups Storm  &#9835;  22:21, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

define the mottles, i cant see any at all. HotTeacher69 (talk) 22:22, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad on the --> side haunch/hinleg. I can't even see the pattern through it 10:19, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the paw shading? 17:48, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? 23:28, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Stonestar (D) ~ Tweaked
OA is Ashshadow and tweaker is Stoneclaw. Tweaked for flat shading. 23:24, September 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs a tiny bit more.

Reupload You mean shading? I defined the shading cause it was still hard to see. 22:16, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

There's something off about the shading. I can't exactly put my finger on it but the shading on the neck looks a lot less blurred than the shading on the back and haunch. Do you mind thinning that part out? 02:16, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:54, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

No, I meant the light, not the shading. The legs look like they're almost all in shadow.

Reupload 04:31, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you maybe get rid of some of the shading on the muzzle? His neck's supposed to be in shadow, not his muzzle. 17:49, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

And define the light on the tail? 18:31 Mon Sep 7

Reupload 22:09, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

the source is still a bit off. The muzzle itself shouldn't have any shadow at all- it should be the normal warrior/deputy source. aka, the one I use most commonly. The neck should be shaded and it should also go up on the top part of the head, by the ears. This way was a style that I used to use, and then I was told that it doesn't have a proper source and I needed to tweak it.

Reupload I pointed out the light source was a bit off during the nomination and someone told me it's fine. :/ so no idea what happened there really. I was just following the shading. 03:29, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Can you add some shading right where the throat slopes down? If I make any sense. If I don't ask me for a redline. 03:35, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes with the redline, I thought I have the throat covered. or I'm just tired XD 03:50, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

http://www.ezimba.com/work/150908C/ezimba12156977645100.png Sorry I had to screenshot my entire screen. Gyazo isn't working for me, and I don't know why. Anywyas the red part is where I think you should have shading. Sorry if its a nitpicky thing. You don't have to do it. But great work anyways :) 04:02, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thnaks. :) I think that stretches the shading too far. I'd like a second opinion on it if no one minds. 04:15, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Red (SD) ~ Redone
OA is Vixenblaze. Tweaked to match rogue. This was honestly not easy, but I gave it a try. 01:33, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the pale parts more 07:17, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:12, September 4, 2015 (UTC)

It may just be because of the shading, but this looks lighter than the rogue. Also, can you define the earpink - I can't really see it. 13:57, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload It's mostly the shading, but I've darkened the image a bit. 23:00, September 5, 2015 (UTC)

This is awesome. Can you define the shading on <-- part of his body? Or her. I don't remember. 04:32, September 6, 2015 (UTC)

Can you be more specific? I mean, the tail shading it looks fine to me, and the left neck shading is the exact same as the other half of the neck shading. Do you mean the <== leg? 04:33, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

That's exactly what I mean. I'm sorry, Stealth, my brain is fried. 17:49, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload No problemo. :) 03:33, September 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (SC) (W) - Tweaked
OA is Goldenpaw with a redo by Mistypebble. Tweaked because of flat shading. 22:55, September 7, 2015 (UTC)

Pearnose (MC) ~ Tweaked
oa be fallow, tweaked to be darker 01:08, September 8, 2015 (UTC)