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Curlypaw (KP) - For Evaluation
I am a lot happier with this one! I like her eyes. 02:44, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading.

Reup 02:57, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading again please. 03:03, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:12, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and darken the shading on the body (sorry that I'm not giving you a break). 03:37, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the <-- side 03:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I still think the shading should be darkened - but it's probably the tint. Is the layer on Multiply? Try that if it's not, or change the brightness setting/saturation/contrast setting =)

Reuploaded 04:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There's still some waste from the above <-- hip all the way to the underside of the tail. 04:42, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 05:36, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the eye-depth

​Reuploaded 21:50, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and earpink. 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you add a bit of shading to the collar? 00:14, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the bottom of the tail, and possibly darken the shading? 02:22, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 06:24, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading more. 15:12, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:59, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

darken the shading. not define, but darken. somewhere there should be a menu for "Hue" or "Brightness," for example, in firealpaca it's under filter. i believe that's what you use? anyway, darken it. 00:45, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:10, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's actually quite a bit of very light waste all around the image. 03:12, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:07, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the collar shading?

Reuploaded 22:48, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but shading appears to be leaking away from the lienart along the back, tail, and left cheek. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 17:06, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:21, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the eye depth a bit. 21:04 Wed Jan 11

Reuploaded 21:55, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

There's like a bump in the lineart at the front of the front leg. I think it's waste.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:34, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I erased all along there and there isn't a bump? did you mean the part of the collar?? There isn't anything. 00:40, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Not sure if I got it, but I think. Darn, my five day streak is gone. That's alright. -- 03:28, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the light on the back and shoulder a little bit, as well as the collar

Reuploaded 05:07, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Comments? 04:55, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smokefoot (Star) - Declined
This didn't take very long, but I did my best! Phew...comments? :D

I fixed the heading, please remove the white background from the image 04:05, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Also, dull down the earpink, it looks too neon. 04:06, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Cinderpool, I don't know how to get rid of the white because this is my first chartart :( Can you tell me how to in the Warriors chat?TawnyBracken (talk) 04:11, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

I removed the alignments — remember to not align them. Also, define the shading on the arm and tail. 04:21, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

You have to acknowledge that you reuploaded the image so people know. Also, this has to be titled Smokefoot.star.png. Also, I've already said not to align your images and it is still aligned. I removed it again. 04:47, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Nice! Add more depth into the eye, and shading is out from the outline in below the chest, right from the right leg, underneath belly between left leg and tail, and above the tail by the back. Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:31, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploadedTawnyBracken (talk) 06:07, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Removed alignment. Reupload a new version of file instead of re-adding pic. You can click your charart image, tap on More Info, then go to file history and click ''Upload a new file. ''Shadowbright67 (talk) 06:22, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-because I forgot to shade the ear X3TawnyBracken (talk) 06:59, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-uploaded𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 07:29, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-uploaded to darken the eyes and smoothen out the shading𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 08:32, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

I think the ear pink is leaking off her head and the shading is leaking from the base of her tail. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  12:04, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 12:48, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Changed it to evaluation. This is your first one (I think) and you need to add yourself to the table and reserve this image. 16:13, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Blur shading. Also, why does it say that Applebreeze is doing this on the table. O_O 23:45, January 15, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:59, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Re-uploaded To fix leaking shading a bit, let me know if it's still visible and I'll do something about it❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 04:28, January 17, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Smooth out the shading a lot. It seems to drastically cut off, when it should be more of a gradient.

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:37, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Declined due to the lack of work. 00:50, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Night (HJ) (K) ~ Declined
Comments? 01:22, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

This file needs to be named File:Night (HJ).kit.png since it's a kit image

Redone 02:48, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

The white seems to be a bit blue, not sure if it's just me...❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 03:14, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Redone  03:24, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading :) 03:47, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Redone  11:45, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

The white still looks too blue on the chest. :) 01:02, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Redone  01:09, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

If the light is coming from the left, as it appears to be, I think there should be more light on the chest (and the white on the chest.) Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 00:12, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Redone 00:17, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the --> ear pink please 01:15, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the black and smooth it a little. I can hardly see it, but it is sort of hard edged from what I can make out. 00:05 Sat Jan 21

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:37, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Declined due to the lack of work. 00:51, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Duckkit (K) - CBA
All colors are from the kit. 02:22, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Amazing! I don't know if it's my screen or not, but define the shading?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 02:57, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

The stripes look a bit darker than the ones on the StarClan image. Shypaw11 (talk) 03:19, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 03:48, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 14:32, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 16:37, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Can you change the texture? As far as I know texture should be done to make it "fur-like", so the lines shouldn't be horizontal... unless it's the stripes instead of texture then by all means disregard me XD this is cute!

That's kinda the way I made them on the kit image though, but I see your point. Should I still change it? 03:39, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

I meant StarClan image. Wow I'm so tired... 03:41, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah I thought the texture was because the pose of the blank the fur kinda goes horizontally... Idk, let's see what others think on this ;P for now, try smoothing out the shading on /his/  left leg/paw?

Reups Still took me a few minutes to figure out which paw you were referring to XD 17:36, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the two front legs just a bit. 23:43, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 02:04, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 00:42, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Darktail (Kit) ~ For Approval
did the shading at midnight so it's messy 15:31, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Fixed the align. Remember no aligning! Also, he looks gray, lessen the texture a bit? 15:42, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten and smooth out the shading a bit. 17:28, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded insert creative message 21:14, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define/add the black markings that should be around his eyes? Also maybe smooth the shading on the legs

reuploaded i really shouldnt try smudged shading

Smoothen out leg shading -- 03:11, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. He's looking more gray than white for the most part. Also, lighten the tail a bit; I can't make out the lineart at all, and my moniter makes things appear lighter. 03:32, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

I can't lighten the tail, that's how it is on his other images. 03:34, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  03:35, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading more? The white really looks gray

reuploaded  03:28, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Where are the black spots on his eyes? 02:27, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

darnit, deleted the layer accidentally and saved and closed it by the time i noticed. those markings can actually be hard 00:18, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail i can bearly see it 23:40, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:32, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

this kinda died shall i send in a necromancer (aka comments?) 04:24, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Ryestalk (Star) - For Approval
Haven't done this in a while so I keep thinking I've done something wrong. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  20:14, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

This needs a reservation and date on the chart^^ :)

Smoothen out the flank shading a bit. c: 04:24, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thanks for telling me I knew there was something I missed c: - I smoothed the flank a little, but not too much as I like the style I created with it. Also reduced the highlight on her back. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  16:52, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Added more stripes to the tail to match apprentice and queen. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  18:46, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thicken the dorsal stripe a tad? It looks thinner than the other images

Thicken all of the stripes and smooth them out. The first in this set is the warrior, not the apprentice, kit, or queen. Also, the facial stripes need to come down past the eyes, and why they don't on the queen and kit is beyond me. (tldr; I designed this pattern, so I kinda know what I'm talking about)

Re-uploaded — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  11:44, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Oliver (KP) ~ For Approval
Eww

Smoothen out the shading by the < eye :) 05:09, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out all the shading, imo.

Define the ear pink just a tiny bit 01:59, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like there shouldn't be quite so much shading on the left cheek, with the direction the light's coming from. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:58, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm late lmao xP Is it better?

Aspenfall (Star) - CBA
what iz art? 20:28, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

White kind of looks gray. Also, define the texture, especially on the gray. 20:54, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the < earpink 20:57, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 10:31, January 22, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure but I think he needs more spots on his flank. — ☆ ｐａｐｅｒ  ·  ｆｉｎｃｈｅｓ  ★  19:59, January 22, 2017 (UTC)

I still can't see the texture on the gray. 20:39, January 22, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:58, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Comments? 03:13, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

I think you should add a spot to the center of his flank, but not too sure if it's appropriate.


 * I think it's fine, since this is a different side showing then the warrior 23:28, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, it's a different side, it's fine. CBA? 00:44, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Bluebellkit (K) ~ For Evaluation
Sorry if this looks bad, or I am doing something wrong. ;-; Fallenice the Great (talk) 23:59, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. Maybe define the shading on the tail, legs, and back paw. 00:02, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Thanks Ivy! Fallenice the Great (talk) 00:08, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. 00:32, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Also, I changed the name to Bluebellkit.kit instead of Bluebell.kit X) Fallenice the Great (talk) 02:34, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the front legs please? 20:05, January 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading tint should still be darkened^^

''Updated. ''Fallenice the Great (talk) 15:08, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the shading a bit on the right foreleg and back paw. 00:41, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little on the chest, to show it's roundness, if that makes sense? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 03:12, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Updated. Fallenice the Great (talk) 13:41, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Stone (HJ) (K)~ For Approval


He looks a bit yellowish, at least on my screen. 21:38, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Blur/smudge the earpink more and define shading in the > ear :) 22:28, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The earpink still seems hard-edged :/ Mind blurring/smudging it more? 01:48, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Cedarheart (K) ~ For Approval
04:12, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. 21:38, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:19, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

Wetfoot (Star) ~ For Approval
16:11, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

Whorlpaw (K) ~ For Approval
wow this was hard to shade. i'm not sure how to feel about this. ~Patch   feather~   19:12, January 27, 2017 (UTC)

I like it! My favorite part is the white "stripe." Breezy1235 (talk) 02:07, January 28, 2017 (UTC)Breezy1235

Breeze, please do not just comment for the sake of a complement. Please give advice if needed. Also, maybe read the rules if you would like to join, so you know. 02:13, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Looking good! Define the shading on the right front leg please? 01:44, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Tinycloud (Q) - For Approval
00:22, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit 00:43, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but there's already quite a bit of depth and I was using the same eye color as her other images. 02:26, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Sandynose (W) ~ For Approval
03:03, January 29, 2017 (UTC)

Can you make the eyebrows more apparent and a little higher above the eye? 03:09, January 29, 2017 (UTC)