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Dawncloud (Q) ~ CBA
Boom. All colors colorpicked from the elder that Jayie has for approval. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:06, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on her belly a bit (I know it's artist's choice but it seems a little too dark), and I don't think her stripes really match the other images, but that might just be me 20:04, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I can't do anything with the stripes. I copied from the elder best I could. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:26, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

It could just be me, but the base coat looks a little light. 10:21 PM, Tue Jul 29, 2014

I think it's because of the highlights. Maybe dull them some? Wow... *o* 22:26 Tue Jul 29

the stripes don't match, possible add more. 01:07, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes are too thin, and there should be striping on the head. I think the highlighting might be a little too bright as well compared to the other Dawncloud images, but that might be up to artist preference, not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:10, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Dulled the highlights, thickened the stripes, and lightened the face shading so you could see the face stripes. I matched the stripes the best I could, and spent about two hours on them. I even pasted the Elder on another layer to use as reference. Queens' bellies are stretched, so so is the pattern, to be fair. (And Duck, adding more stripes probably won't make it match more, because she never had more stripes then this in the first place) Pls don't kill me  Shinxy  Blitz  and  Melody  09:08, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Does she have texture, or is that just the way you've done the shading? 11:35, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

It's shading. I smudged rather then blurred. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  12:05, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Actually, if you look at her StarClanner, she does have more stripes than this facing this way, adding more, would make it match more. 17:47, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. OK, Shinx confirmed for derp. Added some more stripes, although I don't have room for any more. If someone complains, I'll just redo them. Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  21:37, July 30, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit its desaturating her colors. 22:45 Wed Jul 30 2014

There's waste under the belly and on the front leg farthest to us. Brick  09:33, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:58, July 31, 2014 (UTC)

sharpen the stripes a bit 19:11, August 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shinxy Blitz  and  Melody  09:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a teeny bit. This is lovely. *.*

Re-uploaded Thank you! Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

make the stripes more pixel-y 18:31, August 7, 2014 (UTC)

I'm afraid I can't, I tried. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:53, August 8, 2014 (UTC)

You can't unblur them?

Nope. I used the sharpen tool, and it won't work any more. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  19:17, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

try filters>enhance>sharpen, because the stripes on the other images look more pixel-y and less blurred than this image and it's causing this image not to match as well as the others. 14:00, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  17:22, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the two front legs. This is really good :).--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:20, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded TY! Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:08, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be sharpened a bit more- the ones on her other images are a bit smoother and unblurred.

Re-upped OK, I can't sharpen them any more now. I'll get these random multicolored pixels everywhere, including in the stripes, and that'd be heck to get rid of. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:37, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

This looks really good! Tigerbird-The-Great 14:20, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment! However, please don't SPAM.. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:17, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink and blur the shading on the forelegs. She's cute 05:44, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Thank you! Re-upped. I didn't smudge the earpink, because any more and it won't be visible (I tried). I smudged the leg shading more, but I don't blur my shading any more. I did remove some waste though. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  08:16, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry for sounding like a broken record, and please shoot me if you wish, but I think the stripes are still blurred more than they should be. If there's nothing you can do about it, I suppose it's fine, though.

Naw, you're fine. I'd sharpen them more, but when I try I just get random colored pixels on them... I already have a few there. Very, very, VERY sorry. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  10:21, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Point taken. CBA, then?

Frost (StarClan) - For Approval
Did I do a good job? Tigerbird-The-Great 16:59, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, needs a texture, and the image isn't the right size. For the texture, I recommend asking David, the artist of Frost's rogue image, how he made his.

On Frost's page, It says he's thick furred. Tigerbird-The-Great 17:11, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thick fur does not mean long-haired. I have thicker hair, but it wasn't always as long as it is. I used to have it fairly shorter when I was younger, and it was pretty dang thick. The thickness refers to the density of the fur, not the length. Plus, you have an an image to match, and David uses the short-furred blank.

Define and darken the shading a tick, and blur the earpink. Very nice job on this. If it helps, for thick furred cats, to make the shading look less flat, I do two layers of dark blue shading, instead of black. <span style="">5:43 PM, Sat Aug 9, 2014

Did you shrink the lineart at all? It looks much smaller than it should and I don't think it's just displaying as a thumbnail Brick   09:58, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve this before posting it. If you're not gonna reserve it, I'll just decline it again. =P I told you this when you posted it before, and in chat, Tiger.

^ I also told Tiger in one of her lessons. Also, there's waste around the tail, and random black around the earpink. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:53, August 10, 2014 (UTC'''

Re-ups here: http://tinypic.com/r/21a9v1u/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 03:00, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink and maybe dull it a tad as it looks a bit neon right now. Also blur the texture a bit. And the tail suggest the lightsource for the shading is coming from the lower left, but the body suggests it's coming from upper right? Brick  07:51, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste around the head and the base of the tail. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:08, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups here: http://tinypic.com/r/14uci00/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 14:54, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

You still need to blur the earpink more. I also see waste outside of the tail, a black spot near his ear, and the image needs to be resized. He's also looking a bit cross eyed... so perhaps look at other StarClan images to see where the eyes are focused. I'd define the eye depth a little more, too. <span style="">4:21 PM, Mon Aug 11, 2014

Re-up here: http://tinypic.com/r/29wmxr6/8 Also thanks for the tips! Tigerbird-The-Great 17:01, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred. <span style="">17:37 Mon Aug 11

Unblurred lineart here: http://tinypic.com/r/sgpidg/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 17:45, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail, face, and leg shading, (read: add another layer of slightly less blurred shading, it makes it a appear darker while still being on the same opacity as the original layer, give or take), and perhaps the belly shading a little more too. Nice job on the eyes. <span style="">6:05 PM, Mon Aug 11, 2014

The color seems top be overlapping onto the lineart. Is your lineart layer the top one? <span style="">19:52 Mon Aug 11

You need to upload over File:Frost.star.png and post that image here. Just uploading it to tinypic doesn't show the changes here.

I fixed the charart alignment for you. Darken his texture a tad. His texture is a bit darker on his rogue image. Also, Define and add depth to his overall shading, and smudge/blur the earpink. And a little depth to his eyes wouldnt hurt either. Good charart for a beginner :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:23, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Changing heading to For Approval and promoting you, since you know what to do and understand the basics of making chararts. You also need to use the file I linked for reuploading. That is, again, File:Frost.star.png. Using anything else won't work with the template. I can rename it for you.

Uh, the image you just placed on this page belongs to Breezeheart. Did you make a mistake and upload the wrong file or something? That art isn't yours.

I fixed the alignment for you, again. Thank you for changing it. Define the overall shading. Also, what Snow meant, is to reupload over my old image, not post my image instead of your own. When you go to the link she gave you, there is a button that says "Reupload with new file". Reupload this image to it, and that should be the place you keep reuploading, not posting new images everytime.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:06, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Please remember when uploading to make sure the image has the file name ONLY, and nothing like left, right, center, or thumb next to it, to avoid mucking up the page formatting. <span style="">10:28 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

hey guys, please remember that wikia sometimes automatically aligns the image, it's no big deal if someone has to fix it. thanks. 19:16, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

The texture doesn't flow with the fur on the head. <span style="">19:20 Thu Aug 14

I think the texture is a bit too thick, thin it out and have a bit more of it, and make sure it flows with the direction of the fur, not just going straight across the body. Have it follow the curve of the cheek, the nose, the forehead, the slope of the back, and so on. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:04, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

The texture seems a little dark, and the shading is blotchy. <span style="">8:09 PM, Thu Aug 14, 2014

There's waste everywhere. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:52, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Duck, it only auto-aligns if you're not using source mode. It never aligns for me and I only use source. Visual is sometimes a pain in the rear and that's what auto-aligns it. Visual mode is nasty as heck and I hate it lmao source mode is the best thing ever. While I'm commenting, it appears that there are random patches of shading that have vanished or look like they've been erased.. also darken the ear pink a bit as it doesn't quite match the shade used on the rogue.

FYI: The color used for the earpink and nose is #9a6d6d in hex color mode. You can download a picture of it to coloprick from here <span style="">10:08 PM, Thu Aug 14, 2014

Thanks! I'll Re upload soon! Tigerbird-The-Great 23:29, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Try using a 1x brush, and make little strokes throughout the image following the natural way the fur grows, and smudge it with a 1x brush, then play with the opacity until its not as dark.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:41, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

There are bits of missing shading on his paws and tail 09:35, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source 05:45, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Tigerbird-The-Great 03:34, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink and texture a bit more. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  05:14, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I have smudged the texture and the ears. Tigerbird-The-Great 13:56, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the texture a bit more, and there's waste around the lineart. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  16:49, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the texture at all on the white, the belly shading looks very hard edged, and the facial shading could be a bit more defined as well as on the feets. <span style="">7:00 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

Blur the earpink on a guassian blur of 1 and smooth out the shading. <span style="">6:02 PM, Tue Aug 19, 2014

Echomist (Q) - For Approval
05:01, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Can you upload the changes somewhere? I can't see them.

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140811C/ezimba18240393863200.png 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

The pattern fades into the shading, and I think the smudged shading should be thinner? This appears really thick in certain places, like the tail, and it throws it off..

re-uploaded 02:07, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Gonna harass you to upload the changes to ezimba again, dear. Might as well do that by default for a bit, since image changes aren't showing again. =/

http://www.ezimba.com/work/140813C/ezimba18240326878900.png 21:45, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge/whatever and add depth to the shading quite a bit. <span style="">2:20 Wed Aug 13

reuploaded 22:40, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

The earpink is leaking out of her left ear. Brick  05:40, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded arg waste is annoying 19:16, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading.

re-uploaded 23:38, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Give some depth to the shading, but moreso on the edges. Like maybe another, thinner layer of shading that isn't as thick?? idk if that's even the best way to explain it

re-uploaded i usually do that anyway but I was tryin to keep this shading simple lol 02:37, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Lilystem (Q) - For Approval
Oh lawdy ;-; Brick  10:29, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

http://i61.tinypic.com/33ttehg.png, the wiki is having one of those "I won't update images" days. Brick 10:30, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes, and smudge them. 12:53, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

she looks a bit cross-eyes 13:54, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2lar3m8.png, I didn't change the eyes because she doesn't look that cross eyed, more like she's looking at where she's walking. If someone else agrees that she looks derpy eyed I'll change it thought. Brick 14:44, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Duck; she does look a bit cross-eyed.

Re-ups,''' http://i57.tinypic.com/34t5nx3.png     and i must admit on second looking the old eyes did make her look overly interested in whatever she was staring at. Maybe she had just read that Rainflower was actually Stormkit and Oakkit's mother? '''

Try smudging the stripes the way of the belly, like on the warrior image. 17:24, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/23vymmh.png ;-; Brick  10:11, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her legs; she's purrtyy 09:37, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the hindleg farthest from us, and defnie the shading on her face.<font color="white" style="background:blue"> ~ Breezey ~ Gaara Forever ♥☻' 22:42, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i57.tinypic.com/bf2vkn.png Brick  11:11, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Really sorry to interrupt, but try smudging her stripes some more. 22:30, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Pikepaw (MO) (Star) ~ CBA
He needed a StarClan image. Colorpicked from both his Kit and Apprentice images. I know this probably doesnt match 100%, but this was kinda fun to do =).

I used a blue tint for the shading. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:14, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the markings a bit (not a whole lot, I'd say) using a smaller, harder-edged brush.

'''Re-uploaded. '''I used a 1x brush to smudge it, (It was smudged already, but i smudged it a bit more.) And i also added some highlights since i forgot to add that when i first uploaded.

If changes arent showing, go here: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=30j1cie&s=8#.U-qGq-NdVKY

Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:29, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Mmhmm. Now, could you darken those same spots a little bit and shade the ear pink? If you want to shade the ears, that is. It's not mandatory.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Darkened spots and smudged them a tad bit more. I didnt want to shade the earpink, since it was throwing off the color of the pink. I will add shading there if someone else points that out, though. Is that better?

If changes arent showing: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=20b1sw8&s=8#.U-qKneNdVKY~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:47, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

okay, on his other images he has a very light layer of lighter gray texture under his dapples and a very light layer of darker texture under his dapples, he also needs tiny specks hthroughout the image, I achieved it by using a bristle brush on size 10, but you can probably just use a size 1 or 2 and add them throughout. 22:38, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Added layers of lighter gray texture and darker gray texture, added specks, and also darkened spots a tiny bit since the textures made them look faint before. Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:06, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail a bit more.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Defined light on the tail. is that better? =)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:10, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink. Brick 18:50, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I cant smudge it anymore, or it will fade to an almost invisible color. (I added no markings under his ears, so im guessing thats why the small patch of gray is right there).

I really hope i can get this approved before Bramblestar's Storm comes out.. .A. Is that better?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  23:14, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Can you make the pupils larger? Other then that, it's really good. Tigerbird-The-Great 23:17, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Um.. I'd rather not. I've made them like that on all of my chararts, and its artist's choice on how big they are. =/. Thanks for the compliment, though.<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  23:19, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

can you define the tiny dapples? 02:38, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Made pupils more visible upon request from Snowwy, and defined the tiny dapples. is that better?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  02:47, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Sandstorm (Alt Q) - For Approval
Colorpicked from Paleggy's version. Changes here. <span style="">10:06 PM, Tue Aug 12, 2014

She needs a pale muzzle. She is shown with one.

reup  <span style="">12:17 AM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

You linked the wrong image. That's a kit image. <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  09:54, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reupped and fixed the link above ^^ <span style="">6:41 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

Darken the shoulder shading just a bit.

Define the light on the hindleg farthest from us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:54, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

re-up changes <span style="">10:34 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

Blur the shading a tiiiiny bit more? <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:39, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, I think it's good. If she blurs it anymore, I think she would end up getting told to define it again.

Define the shading on the face and give the shading on the belly some more depth 22:48, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

The hind leg that Breezeheart mentioned earlier in the comments still looks flat. Add a little highlight and it'll be good. c: 16:32, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Also, define the shading on the face. It looks quite flat right now; maybe give it some depth?--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  23:01, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Scarletwind already said that above. <span style="">10:59 PM, Sun Aug 17, 2014

Well, im sorry? And actually, she said give the belly more depth, I said to also give the face more depth, because both were actually looking really flat.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  01:14, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define and give depth are pretty interchangeable imho. It all depends on the context. Which, I think the depth of the facial shading is fine, but where the shading ends could be defined a bit.

Re-up. You don't need to get so defensive, Breezeheart, I was just pointing out that Scarletwind already said to define the facial shading. As for that bit of it, I'm slighly confused about what you mean, Jayce, so I haven't really touched that. <span style="">6:58 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

Well, I'll be glad to at least try and explain what I meant. =P You know how the shading just tappers off after a while near the edges of it? Well, it appears to just vanish, and I'm basically saying the facial shading is a bit overblurred.

reup Thanks Jayce. <span style="">9:55 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

Deerleap (Star) ~ For Approval
I love Deerleap :3 21:30, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Expand/define the earpink. And remember to sign your posts with ~ ~ ~ ~, mystery member! :3 Brick  21:47, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge where the white meets the gray a bit more, also, smudge the tail tip also. and define the overall shading.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:50, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Better? SziriXxX (talk) 22:21, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps add some depth to her eyes? also, is her muzzle and chest supposed to be white, or a pale gray?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:26, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

It shouldn't be either. Also, lighten up her legs- they should be white.

Re-ups Darkened chest and muzzle,lightened legs and added eye depth. SziriXxX (talk) 22:48, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Mind defining; NOT darken, the shading on the legs? also, i can barely see the earpink in the ---> ear. ~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:54, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Defined leg shading and lightened earpink SziriXxX (talk) 23:25, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

I see a white pixel on her tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:27, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Got rid of the white pixel SziriXxX (talk) 23:41, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the front paw shading. 13:31, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 18:16, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes kind of merge into the shading, so if you could lighten it up a bit that'd be nice. Also, smudge the white into the gray fur a bit more...It currently looks a bit abrupt. Looks pretty :) Keep up the good work! 16:18, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes and shading appear good to me, honestly. I can distinguish them from the shading just fine.

I can't see the stripes through the shading on the top of the back. It looks like a solid stripe of shading. I don't know it might look different to others. 16:55, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

On the upper back? That dark stripe is a dorsal stripe, and there aren't any other stripes up there but that one giant one, which is supposed to be there... unless we're not looking at the same area, which is possible.

It might actually be the dorsal stripe. I ddin't think about that. But even if it is, I don't see any stripe in this pale gray part after it...[don't know] you see it for yourself. But I don't wanna fight again lol I respect you too much to do that. 22:18, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

It's a pretty thick dorsal stripe, and it would be hard to fit in smaller stripes, since there's only a couple pixels of space.

Re-ups Smudged white parts SziriXxX (talk) 20:33, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

I love it! Tigerbird-The-Great 21:20, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Tiger, if you don't have any critique to give, please don't comment on a charart. It counts as spam. ^^' Perhaps define the light/ and shading on the tail?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  21:34, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Tigerbird :3 SziriXxX (talk) 09:51, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother (Q) - CBA
I am insanely happy with this. Not sure it totally matches though. Suggestions? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:22, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Oh, and here's the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140815C/ezimba13931876423800.png Jayie  Unwritten words~ 02:23, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit.

Blurred the stripes, thinned out the darkest stripes, added a bit of texture, and basically just revamped it and made it match the other image more. I think it matches way better now. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:49, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

I also changed the shading to match better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:44, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the darkest stripes a bit, to match the StarClan image.
 * gawking* she so beautifuuuul~    Brick  08:33, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blurred the stripes, though I think I might've blurred them a bit too much... Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:40, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think they're over blurred. It looks purrty :) 00:52, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Shattered Ice (Warrior) ~ For Approval
Heyyy :D Missed you all so much <3 Alrighty, so it's my first image back so don't go too rough on me..if you hate the tinted shading let me know. But black shading didn't make it look good at all. The pattern is a real pattern, but if you hate that let me know. Not bad for my first one in a while. :) Comment away!  18:33, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

The gray and white dosen't quite match the rogue image, and he needs to be long haired. 18:35, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Whoops sorry, my bad. Didn't know there was a rogue image. I'll redo it. 18:38, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It actually went pretty smoothly on the body. The tail was my troublemaker..I know it doesn't look too good, but I tried..any suggestions on the tail pattern? x.x Lemme know if there's any shading probs. 16:13, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any gray near the front legs (looking at the rogue a bit more anyways), and expand the white chest area a little bit too.

Tbh, I think those areas are fine. Because if you look at the rogue's front leg closely, the gray is going down the leg a bit, like over the muscle. And the gray went over the chest exactly as this is, because the rogue is almost exactly like the warrior blank, only difference is the rogue sat down and raised his head up. That's how I looked at it and based my design. But of course, if someone else agrees with you, I'll change it. :3 Just stating my opinion. 16:39, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Skye - there shouldn't be as much gray, since there's some spots with gray that the rogue doesn't have. 16:44, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, not on the front legs? Forelegs are front, not back. There is no gray on that chest area leading down to the legs, while you have some here. The white chest is also fairly larger on the rogue, while with this, I can't even tell he has one. There shouldn't be any gray there at all, since the rogue and warrior are facing the same direction. The gray area should be the belly area, not the chest, which on the rogue and warrior blanks, are two different things. The belly is the area between the legs on this blank, while on the rogue, there's more room, and you can tell where the belly is. With these blanks, that area is quite a bit smaller. As you have it, it does not quite match, and since they're facing the same direction, the placement should match as well. If it was the opposite side, you'd have more room to "play", so to say, but with this, you don't.

Gosh no need to be rude. I was just stating an opinion and asking for a gentle comment. I'll fix it later. .-. 16:59, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

I wasn't being rude. I was explaining my critique in further detail. I fail to see exactly how I was being rude, when all I was doing was elaborating on my apparent rejected comment. When you post art, this should be expected. I was providing you with a legitimate comment, and telling you to move something, remove something, expand something, ect, isn't rude. Rude would be lying to you and telling you this doesn't match at all- which it does pretty much match, actually, except for that patch of gray, which I asked you to fix....and also define the light on both front legs too, please. ^^

Define your tail light. And Snow is right; they wasn't being rude, but purely honest. 17:38, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry...It's just I've been through a lot of crap recently and cats have just been being mean to me so when you use italics and bolds it just comes off the wrong way at first. I read it over a few times just now and realized you didn't mean it to be in a rude way. So I'm sorry for overreacting. -Back to the image, I removed the gray from the white underbelly and from above the foreleg. Added a few highlights on the legs and tail to help show where that light is at..sorry again Cloudy. 22:06, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Looking good (he looks very fluffy :3)! Can you just darken the shading, especially on the tail?

Reuploaded. Haha, thank you Stoney! :3 22:36, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading going down the spine and on the back leg. Brick 18:44, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't blur it too much for I think I'd be told to define it again. 19:37, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey I don't mean to rush but I have to get this approved by Friday because I'm going to AZ for 9 days. No computer is accessible. So please comment so we can get this approved fast?? Thank you!! :) 19:13, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

The white on the back legs look really gray, and I believe there would be at least a little bit of light on them. Also define the shading on the gray. Please don't ask for comments after only a day. If it's been like three, that's one thing. One is rushing it and makes you appear really impatient.

Re-uploaded. I'm sorry, I've been told that more than once. But I do really need this approved by Friday..or I don't know what I'll do. 22:36, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

I realize this, but that doesn't mean we can twist things because of others going on vacation. People are busy and have lives. Also, shift the placement of the white a bit on the face. The white on the rogue goes a bit farther up, and is a bit thinner on the muzzle. This kinda shows exactly where I'm talking about. There's also flecks of faded lineart throughout the image, especially on the tail.

Re-uploaded. Is that better? And in case uploads are not working again... 17:36, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Mapleshade (A) ~ CBA
I borrowed Scarlet's lineart. I am not looking forward to this. <span style="">21:37 Sat Aug 16

What is there not to be looking forward to? This is awesome! Maybe just define the earpink a bit, It's almost the same color as her orange fur. :3

Re-uploaded. Thanks. c: I was worried about people not being able to see the shading. <span style="">22:19 Sat Aug 16

She's supposed to have spikey fur on her back and I'd say mottling the patches a bit more would help. <span style="">11:02 PM, Sun Aug 17, 2014

I think they're both fine. I mean, it's not like her fur would be ragged in the same place her whole life. <span style="">0:52 Mon Aug 18

I agree, maybe add a few spikes along her back? Also, define the earpink. This is amazing, Hawk =)--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  22:38, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

I can barely see the earpink in <--- this ear. She's so beautiful :OOO 22:42, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Aww thank guys :3 <span style="">23:15 Mon Aug 18

CBA?

Littlebird (Star) - For Approval
probably my first tabby I ever did that I actually liked. colors are pulled off of the original file. comments? 19:24, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna take a guess that you smudged the shading? If you did, thin the smudges out a little bit, and if you didn't, blur the shading/smooth it out. Also her elder looks kinda shiny so I suggest maybe fixing that sooner or later since that shading makes this look different in terms of color.

Add depth to the shading. This is gorgeous. <span style="">20:27 Sun Aug 17

Oh myyyyy, this is beautiful! Define the face shading a tad? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  22:17, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded thanks dudes! 02:38, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Ducky! :D Define the earpink a little more..it seems to disappear with the fur colors. Also blur the smudged shading some more. 17:46, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lizardstripe (Star) ~ For Approval
Used the colors and stripe pattern from her other chararts. Comments? :3

Oooohhh pretty! Smudge the earpink a little bit? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  16:47, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Thanks! ^^ I smudged the earpinks. It doesn't show much difference, though. Click for changes.

Her muzzle and upper/bottom of her neck looks a bit gray omg those eyes made an mean cat look so cute :o 21:11, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit, and can you make the stripe less smooth? Her other images are a little...bumpier, so to say. Blur them a teeny bit too.

Tawnypelt (Alt Ki 4) ~ For Approval
Okay, she was described as being pale brown and there was something about her being described with a white muzzle, chest, tail, and paws, but I can remove those easy. <span style="">7:38 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

They're different descriptions. That white is used when she's a tortie. Go ahead and remove 'em, please. ^^ Also, blur the shading just a bit.

Maybe define it a touch, too. 21:09, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

'reup'  <span style="">9:57 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

She looks green. Maybe use around the range of #B18567? Pale brown is a tricky color to work with. =/

I didn't think she looked green... I color picked from the earpink chart and used brown for the shading. reup she looks pink now... <span style="">5:25 PM, Tue Aug 19, 2014

That earpink chart is outdated and really shouldn't be used for a reference. She doesn't look pink at all to me, honestly.

Brick (Ro) - For Approval
Now that we have an actual confirmed description instead of an assumption...

Wow, this is really good. =) Perhaps define the spot where the fur is missing a bit more?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  22:36, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Darnit, I wanted this.... Define the shading on the tail a tiiiiny bit? This is gorgeous. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  23:27, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. <3

Define the farthest hind leg's shading slightly. gah i was gonna nab this once I was done with Lilystem    Brick  10:16, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

maybe blur the body shading a bit 10:45, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tweaked other things.

I'm sorry if this is a dumb question feel free to shoot me if it is but isn't s he supposed to have a collar? Brick  17:35, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

That's actually a very good question, Brick. Are we still doing the collar thing for all BloodClan cats, guys? I honestly can't remember, and it's been ages since I've made an image for BloodClan.

Re-uploaded. Gave him a collar anyways. Not making it anything other than purple.

Blur the tail shading a bit. He looks really good ^.^ 22:31, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Duskfur (Queen) ~ For Approval
Since Snow withdrew this, i gave it a shot since she needed a Queen image. I tried to match the stripes the best i could. Colorpicked from her Warrior image, i used a redish tint for the shading. Also, that stripe on the tail is part of the dorsal stripe. Comments?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  00:58, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Her dorsal stripe should be sorta more to the left on her tail, and same with the back because of the perspective. Brick 10:20, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the pale part on her tail, and I'm also agreeing with Brick. ^^

'''Re-uploaded. '''I just decided to redo the stripes. Moved dorsal stripe to the left, and made pale parts look more visible. Is that better?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  02:04, August 20, 2014 (UTC)