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Shellkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
How do you charart. . . lol. I'm aware the shading needs smoothing out, but I'll fix it later.

re-up I tried.

Smooth out the head shading, define the tail shading, and add some lighting to --> front leg and paw. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 10:32, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:14, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I'll try to see what I can do for --> leg and paw shading. (yeah this is why kit shading sucks)

That looks better. :) Smooth out the shading on the forehead, and define the tail shading. Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 16:18, September 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Can you define the light on the tail?

re-up

Can you define the shading on -> leg just a bit, and it looks like there's shading leaking behind the same leg

Maybe define the tail shading just a smidge?

I can see the tail shading just fine. These blanks are tiny and have even tinier tails.

Probably just my laptop 💁🏾‍♂️

re-up

Crowfeather (De) ~ For Approval
Wow.. bad dad is deputy. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:35, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

define the texture 04:36, 9/05/2017

Re-uploaded. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 04:41, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe make the pale parts look more... idk,, they look as if they're made with chalk on the other images, i guess? Make them rougher maybe?? If anyone else could throw in their opinion or reword what I said, that'd be great.

It might just be my laptop but maybe blur the shading on the muzzle? And perhaps tone down the tint a bit?

The shading on the belly looks lighter than on other parts of the body, maybe darken/define it a bit? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:24, September 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hope I got everything you guys says. The shading on the belly was the same as the chest n other parts. Hope it's okay now. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:42, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

i can rant on for days about this piece of -censored- being the deputy, but anyways, would you like the file for the warrior/kit?

Sure! Send it to cometandcosmo@yahoo.com. Thanks! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 16:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Was there something anything else wrong with this? Is the texture not hard-edged still or anything? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:16, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

I think the facial texture is... for a lack of a better explanation, too smooth and bright. Try "breaking" it up more. Also I sent you the file.

Re-uploaded. It looked bright because of not having shading around it and the other pale parts have shading on them. I redid the texture and tried following how you did it. I still failed... C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 05:52, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

He looks a little too bright atm, it's possible that my file is somewhat outdated. Try color picking the base from the loner. If that doesn't work try thickening the texture. I used a 1px paintbrush and drew lines as texture.

Re-uploaded. So much better! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 20:38, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm mistaken, but since the light is coming from the right --->, shouldn't the tail shading be on the other side of the tail? 01:40, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the texture on -> front paw, and maybe lighten the opacity of the texture? It looks lighter than the other images and I think it's because of the texture

Re-uploaded. Not making him any darker or lighter. I think he matches quite well and the images don't need to be exact to match. But I can see why he was lighter. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:49, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Is it my screen, or do the eyes look kind of whitish-grey compared to the blue of the other images? I'm not necessarily saying anything has to be changed, just checking to see whether it was just my screen or just the way Wikia shows certain colors or whatever. 14:09, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

I color-picked the eyes from the kit or the warrior. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 14:47, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Yay I love crowfeather. Maybe define the shading? 16:41, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Tuna (Ro) - For Approval
Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading <span style="">21:36, 9/07/2017

Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading

Renamed.

Define the shading a bit on the front leg furthest from us, and the light on the front leg closest to us. 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

think you can make the shading by the hind leg curve a bit? it looks add cutting right across the thigh. 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Try and curve the haunch shading more - still looks the same in cutting across the haunch. I also think that the light needs to be defined on the the < side of the cat, and definitely expanded on the face.

Define the ear pink. Good job. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 22:24, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on all legs/paws, and on the tail

could you expand the shading on the back and flank? <span style="">12:11 Mon Sep 11

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

He needs to be a tabby (unless my cite is wrong, then ignore this)

I have the ebook version of Tigerheart's Shadow, so I can't check. But if somebody who does have the solid version can verify it, I'll add it. I'm assuming you have it, as you added the site? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:10, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

I checked it. He is confirmed as a tabby. 21:27, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ahhh I lurve him with stripes --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:43, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws again

Define the shading depth on the tail and hindleg closest to us, just a tad. 20:55, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

think you can connect some of the tabby stripes to each other and the legs and back and tail? they look a bit more like mottled markings to me as they are. 22:42, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I changed the stripe pattern and shading, though I think now I maybe should have tried to change the previous one. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe connect them on the back like how a ticked tabby would be. They still look like they're all over the place. Maybe add a dorsal stripe and add more stripes to the face, legs, and tail? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 20:16, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the light on the front paws a little more, and maybe smooth the stripes a tad? <span style="">0:40 Thu Sep 14

Blaze (Ki) ~ CBA
Whoa, sorry for disappearing. School started up and I became busy. Here's Blaze. Not too pleased with his stripes. 01:29, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

could you lighten up the shading just a tick? 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Hm, I think if Vec smooths out the shading a bit, she might not have to lighten the shading...

Reups Doesn't look like much of a difference on these tiny blanks, but I can lighten it if it's still too dark. 02:01, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

i think the shading is still too dark. also, try and make the stripes curve more, they look like straight lines across the blank.

Reups 21:15, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the stripes a little? They blend into the base a tad

Maybe smooth the shading bit more on the white chest/belly area? 23:28, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 00:24, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and <-- leg? Fantastic! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 22:24, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thank you! 01:25, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? 14:10, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Growler (Ro) - For Approval
Gonna tweak that tail pattern later on so the tail doesn't look so gray...

Smooth out the patches a bit; they seem a tad hard-edged. 15:17, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

The effect was intentional. The patches on Jayie's image above has the patches at just about the same roughness as mine. Snookthorn also has some pretty hard-edged patches as well.

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Did some stuff.

dang it i was gonna grab this one, welp, can you define the shading on the front leg closest to us? 20:43, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like this one better.

There's a random white pixel in the black part of the tail. Not sure if it's part of the design, but it looked kinda outa place to me. 00:28, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Could you define the shading depth on the back of the head and on the > side of the flank?

I think there are two unfilled pixels by the area where the belly and the back legs meet

can you smooth the shading more by the shoulder to the belly it looks odd next to the pattern <span style="">12:16, 9/11/2017

Re-uploaded for the head shading and the pixels. Give me a bit and I'll do the other part of Spooky's comment and yours too, Winter.

Re-uploaded. This looks so different on the desktop...

u think u can define the shading some more i'm having trouble seeing it 22:40, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried.

Ajax (KP) - CBA
ahaha i might lighten the shading... 17:07, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you? He looks tri-colored and I was really confused as to his pelt color for a minute...

Re-uploaded. i lightened it, and changed the tint. i might redo it. I also tried putting little dinosaurs on his color, but idk if you can tell what they are. 20:17, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

he looks a little gray right now, mind lightening him up a bit?

Re-uploaded. i couldn't get it too look right so i went ahead an redid it. 13:52, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste outside the front paw. This is beautiful! 16:26, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

^^ there's also some by the -> whiskers

Re-uploaded. thanks! 01:20, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading around the muzzle and paws and the hind leg closest to us? Good job!! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 22:23, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. redid the shading. i cannot get this to look right >:C 00:22, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

It looks beautiful, Patch! Smooth out the shading around the muzzle and the hind leg closest to us again? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:29, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thanks ^^ 20:49, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? 16:42, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Pigeonkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Prob gonna edit the shading and add texture but I'm just gonna post this now

Prettyyy!! Smooth out the shading some? 15:32, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs^^

Define the ear pink in --> ear and add a tiny bit of lighting to the back paw that is showing? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 22:20, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

This should be named File:Pigeonkit (SC).kit.png because the page name is Pigeonkit (SC), not just Pigeonkit. 14:32, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

causally sneaks in here and renames the file.

This is really cute. Define chest shading a little?

Define the shading the the left ear maybe? along with the legs, and i don't know if his back paw is supposed to be white or gray, if it's white then lighten it up a bit. Nice job! 20:59, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks guys! :) I think I got to everything but if you think I missed something let me know

The toes drawn in with shading on the --> front leg look really pixely, smudge them a tiny bit?

Shadowkit (Ki) - CBA
uwu 18:59, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Needs to be cropped to lineart

it is...all my kit images are cropped like this. 06:16, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Well it isn't on the sides but it's not a big deal and if you've had other images cropped the same way... Sorry, my bad

didn't meant to sound hostile, my bad. if I get another comment on the image I'll look into fixing it. 00:24, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Best design kitten ever. This is so beautiful! Maybe define the shading just a smidge? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:50, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 13:40, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Did the book say what his eye colors are? Infoseeker95 (talk) 14:30, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

not that I know of? 14:32, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

The book never mentioned his eye color. (Also David this is amazing.)

CBA?

Sparrowtail (Lo) - For Approval
Shading on SAI2 is awful lol. <span style="">21:51 Sat Sep 9

define the shading depth <span style="">01:02, 9/10/2017

Reuploaded Not sure if technically valid since Broken is blocked right now, but *shrugs* <span style="">15:25 Sun Sep 10

Smooth out the shading some and define it some more on the face. Good job!! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 22:21, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

So I could not get it any smoother without losing the depth (SAI 2 doesn't have a blur tool anymore, so I have to use the watercolor tool for shading), but I did define the face shading a little bit. I'll upload it when I'm done with my lab assessments. <span style="">14:42 Tue Sep 12

Cinnamon (Lo) - For Approval
I tried to choose a cinnamon-colored base without making it too ginger. 22:35, September 9, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the edges of the body & closest haunch shading?

Re-uploaded. 13:15, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit? 01:27, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:50, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, as this still seems a little too gingery, this is the official cinnamon color, if you wanted to use that <span style="">12:20, 9/11/2017

Re-uploaded. I didn't use that exact color, but I used a similar shade of it that was less dark and saturated. 13:23, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Cinnamon (Alt Lo) - For Approval


Beautiful! Define the shading depth? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 22:21, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded thank god for free wifi hotspots around town. If I don't post another upload for a few days - it's because I'm still w/o power from the hurricane :P

Raindrop (Ki) - For Approval
shiny rain kitty <span style="">12:18 Mon Sep 11

smooth out the darker shading... ? if that makes any sense lol 13:07, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the ear pink a bit. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:30, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Are you using highlights? If you are, could you dull them down a little bit? I'm not sure if it's shading clashing with the base or not...but she seems kinda shiny?

re-up <span style="">23:59 Tue Sep 12

Diesel (KP) ~ For Approval
i either wanted to do the kittypet or the loner, ive had both images already finished so i just wanted to decide which one to do lol 13:41, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/blur/smooth out where the paler parts meet the base color. I also think the eye depth could be defined a bit. 17:56, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. 20:50, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

re-up the is the ugliest charart ive ever drawn 22:08, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

I don't know if this was purposeful, but the pale parts look gray, perhaps make them look a little more yellowish? Maybe define the shading depth. It's looking good! 02:19, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think there's some shading leak on the haunch from the front leg. 17:17, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Birdy (Ki) ~ For Approval
I messed around with the shading layer a tad, I'm trying a new style. 22:39, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

She seems a little.. not neon.. but unnaturally colored (unless this is colorpicked/similar to her manga color, then ignore me)

I don't know, honestly. I don't have the color version. 23:08, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe try #8d6d48? That's what I got when I colorpicked from a picture of the color version.

Reuploaded Thank you so much Star! That really helped. 00:35, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a bit under the chin? Define the ear pink and shading depth. 02:22, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:46, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Streak (Ki) ~ For Approval
Since I never got around to it: to everyone to complimented me, thank you! 22:57, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

the line of shading on the --> seems a little too straight. could you curve it a little so it follows the body more? if that makes any sense. nice image btw <span style="">0:03 Wed Sep 13

Could you redline or circle where you're talking about, Princess? I just want to make sure where to curve it. 10:18, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

here's an outline of the area <span style="">0:33 Thu Sep 14

Husker (Lo) ~ For Approval
Comments? 14:52, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Could you round out the flank shading slightly? It seems a bit box-like (idk how to say it, sorry ;-;) because it goes straight across the belly and at right angles on both sides

Reuploaded. 17:44, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think you can draw in the fluffy eyebrows correct me if I'm wrong tho

I think it's okay. Little Mew had the same tuft of fur on her head, and her lineart was edited to incorporate that. If I remove this, her image would also need to be tweaked. 17:55, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Given it seems to be a prominent thing in Husker's artwork, and we're matching a color version that clearly shows it's him... I'd say the eyebrows are acceptable to add.

Pad (Ki) - For Approval
I couldn't get the shading to look right so *shrug*