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Thistleclaw (Ki) ~ Redone
I totally ruined it. >< OA is Nightshine, Redone artist is Ivystripe and tweakers are Ashshadow and me. Tweaked tom match description. Many credit and thanks to Burntclaw for sending in the apprentice file, and that made my life much easier. :) 08:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white 08:56, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

K so I smudged my white patches with a 10 px bristle brush and i did not smudge or blur the texture- i used a paint brush and added dark and light tones to show the light hitting the fur and the shadows to give his fur a "bristling" effect. Nice image, anyway =) 09:09, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Also define the texture on the white please. 09:12, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

why does he have white paws? hes only speicifed white and grey on his face and shoulders. 11:03, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

nvm, cite got found 12:06, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 22:53, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

He looks like hes still mottled, is that intentional? 22:57, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

That's texture. There is tabby stripes I promise, it's just harder to see because it's a tiny image. 23:01, October 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white more please, with a hard edged one px brush 01:52, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload If I have to turn the internet upside down to get a better smudge tool >< 07:21, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Ok I'm going to be that person but I still seriously think you should smudge the white more ;; 13:13, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

The texture on his face isn't texture; it's little triangles that just throw the colour off...also, could you add a bit of depth to the shading? It's looking a bit flat. 13:15 Sat Oct 3

Reupload I'm being careful with the shading as the texture and stripes disappear when it gets too dark, and I'm near the brink. Everyone's fluffing up their Thistleclaw a lot! Do I need to fluff Thistlekit? 20:18, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

His other images appear to have a small bit of black near the eyes- do you mind adding that? The warrior and dark forest images show what I'm insinuating. 21:27, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't tell me to smudge it anymore, cause I did before and it somehow disappeared O.o. 21:49, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

White looks gray on the paws 23:57, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 00:03, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

I still think it looks gray to me, tbh. Try erasing some shading on them 01:01, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload White against dark is a pain >< 05:42, October 5, 2015 (UTC)

i don't know why but the texture makes him look mottled... 07:29, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the two front paws. 20:36, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I've lowered the opacity of the texture to help see the stripes and smudged them. I completely forgot about the paws so I'll do that in the next upload. 21:01, October 6, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make him look more spiky, like on the apprentice and warrior? 01:05, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload spike! spiiiiiiiiike! That's a fun word. 07:30, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

fluff up his left side of the cheek, it looks oddly unbalanced. 11:40, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Uh tomorrow is when it's a week since I posted. If this doesn't pass by tomorrow, (which seems unlikely), will this be declined? 05:12, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

A redone image is 2 weeks. Could you fluff out the right side of the face more? (On the face) 05:42, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 04:57, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

The texture just looks like random scribbles, and it doesn't match the flow of the fur. Fix it, please. 14:44 Fri Oct 9

Reupload 00:05, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Make the tail more spiky. 02:20, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload 05:48, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

I still think the face could be more spiky, cause it kinda looks... awkward? for a lack of a better word 23:15, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the legs more spiky, like all of his other parts? Nice work :) ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 08:51, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

If theyre not spiky on his other images then it shluld stay 20:15, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Nettlebreeze (E) ~ Redone
OA is me. Redone to match. I couldn't sum up to Shinx's awesome skills... :( 21:51 Sat Oct 3

I'll add the rheumy eyes and he ragged fur in my next upload. Oops. 21:53 Sat Oct 3

Don't forget the cloudy eyes! :) The colour doesn't seem to match the other images. His a bit orange-r than the others. (Is that even a word? Orange-r?) 22:00, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Did you add the layer of texture? There's a very light one on the apprentice, I'm not sure if you added it or not. This looks gorgeous. :) The color is fine, I think. I sent Hawky the file, the colors will probably be colorpicked fro that. I use highlights on my images, which makes them look a bit brighter. 22:10, October 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading 01:17, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading's fine. 01:23, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, Shinx. I used texture. I made sure you could barely see it, because you can barely see it on the apprentice. 3:03 Sun Oct 4

No, it's really not @Apple. Please smooth it out some more on the legs 03:04, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

In my opinion it is. Literally it looks blurred as it is but if someone else disagrees then I guess. 03:05, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is fine, tbh. 03:06, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also I did color pick off of the apprentice .xcf 3:14 Sun Oct 4

Blur the shading on the earpink? This is beautiful. 22:34, October 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make it a bit lighter to match the apprentice and kit? It looks a bit too dark atm, and could you lighten the tail where they have lighter parts? It blends to much with the original pelt color 16:01, October 8, 2015 (UTC)

The reason the pelt looks darker is due to the shading, and that also applies to the tail. I colorpicked off of the .xcf of the apprentice. As for the earpink, I will get right on that. 23:33 Thu Oct 8

Actually if your light source is comin from where i think it is, the top of the tail would show some light in that aspect 19:57, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Got it. 21:52 Fri Oct 9

Are you able to lighten the well, 'light' parts of the tail? 22:01, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 0:44 Tue Oct 13

Mistystar (W) ~ Tweaked
Second try.

Blur the shading some more and define it on the most unvisible paw. 18:10, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups

Blur the shading more, please.

re-ups Believe me or not, it's actually getting over-blurred. I toned the shading down a bit and hopt that helps.

It is not over-blurred. Blur the haunch more please. 12:36 Mon Oct 12

re-ups I tried, okay? ;-; I cannot blur it anymore...

try enlightening the shading and have a mix of smudging and bluring shading. It might help. 15:01, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the neck shading? 05:24, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the tail? 22:46, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Tornear (Star) - Tweaked
OAs are Ruefrost and me. Before you kill me, I was given permission to tweak the other stuff, and this is my image, so I added some eye depth. 14:59, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

You asked me if you could tweak the shading and it also looks like the texture or whatever's underneath the stripes was redone as well? I didn't give you permission for that...

In all honesty, Burnt, the everything blue thing you got going on here is throwing off the color a tad too much. Can you dull it down a bit, or change the highlights to a more white color? 22:39, October 9, 2015 (UTC)

Idk.... For me, texture and shading are the same? If there wasn't light difference, fur darkness wouldn't show up... I could revert it though, do you want me to do that? 00:07, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

If you could? If you want to redo the shading itself, that's more than fine, since that's what you asked me if you could do. But I always thought the texture was different...unless your texture is built into your shading layers??? which if that's the case, then it's fine.

I usually mix up shading layers and texture, since I deemed that they were the same thing... So do I revert it? 04:16, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Preferably, yes. 04:52, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think she is able revert it back tbh. 05:18, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

All she needs to do is revert it back to the old image on the file and do what she did to this one, excluding redoing the texture. 14:23, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

... In fact, Icy... I cannot revert it anymore. My texture and my shading layers were merged and saved and therefore I cannot revert it. 04:00, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

it looks fine anyway.....it matches enough. 05:14, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded For the white highlights. 05:55, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) - Tweaked
lightened. oa was insane and duck, and i tweaked it. 04:53, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the paw light? 15:45, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 16:13, October 10, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten her some more. It's literally nearly white, a bit above silver. I compared the apprentice and the elder, and mine was a good amount lighter 02:17, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Snow, this is the same color code that Cloudy gave me... 02:21, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe it's my computer again, but mine seems alot lighter for some reason... Shouldn't you match mine anyway? Mine was approved first, unless I'm completely missing Skye's charart 02:26, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Icy already said it's the same colour and shade. They look matched to me, so it must be your monitor. 02:28, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

It probably is, because I'm using a crappy tv as my monitor lol (a small one). Anywho, can you brighten the earpink just a tiny bit? 02:41, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 02:46, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can you possibly smooth out the shading a bit more? 12:37, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 23:32, October 11, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is creeping away from the lineart on the back and next and back of the head. Fix that? 12:37 Mon Oct 12

What do you mean? 13:14, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

She means the shading is leaking on the back and the neck 13:19, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I don't know if I fixed it... 13:38, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

It still appears as if theres still some shading leaking on the back along the tufts of fur that are sticking up as well as behind the ear closest to us 20:12, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

You sure? It doesn't show that on my screen - and GIMP doesn't show it. 22:39, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah I used my phone to double check. It's really hard to see, but I see it 22:41, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see any leaking shading, on my phone or my computer.

Birchfall (W) ~ Tweaked
tweaked his leg light area while i was at it, it was kinda muddy grey brown whatever. also nuked some waste 05:13, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the tail? 05:24, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded 06:15, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (Star) - Tweaked
OA was me. Removed ragged fur 20:56, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

I know its not what it was nominated for, but can you add some shading depth? 20:11, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (D) - Tweaked
OA was me. Removed ragged fur 20:56, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

The highlight on his chest makes it look like he has a white chest that's too blurred. Can you darken it? 00:05, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:54, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

It still looks like he has a silver chest or something. Can you darken it a more? 20:10, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Birchfall (K) ~ Tweaked
OA is Skt, Mistypebble, and Shaf Girl. Tweaked due to flat shading. 20:58, October 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the neck shading? 05:23, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

 Reuploaded  05:55, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Runningstorm (W) - Redone
much better :-) OAs are insane and me. redone for issues. 01:41 Tue Oct 13

I know you've noticed, but waste. :) 01:43, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading plz 01:56, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. i realized that this pattern is like a grown up version of my old pattern :') 22:14 Tue Oct 13

I don't know if you noticed or not (it might only be me) but it looks like on the very base, back of the tail, it looks like the color is receding away from the lineart? 22:43, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Shellheart (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA was shelly. Tweaked to remove ragged fur. 02:39, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? i can hardly see it 22:45, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnflower (W) ~ Tweaked
OA's are Sandwich989, Dapplecloud33, Scarletwind, and Snowed. Tweaked to lighten. When I lightened it the shading lightened too, and it disapeared, so I added a couple layers of shading. If I'm not supposed to touch the shading I can put it back though. 19:46, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

This needs to be lightened quite a bit more. The color i picked when i did the apprentice was very light silver near white. Maybe if you could color pick from both images and compare them, and then lighten? 20:09, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Do you think you could define the earpink? I can't really see it. 20:13, October 13, 2015 (UTC)