Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 88

Stoneteller (NP) (Alt. He) - Approved
He was described as a stone gray tom in Outcast. Solid gray cats kill me... Comments? 03:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't he already have an alt for this but just with stripes? 03:40 Wed Apr 4

Blur the shading on the arms, chest, and back thigh (whatever yu call cats' thighs) 06:07, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have mud? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Mountain, Whispering Breeze has an alt for being called a tabby and there are two different descriptions. @Sky, Stoneteller's don't get mud because they don't leave the cave or something, I don't remember the actual fact, besides that they don't get mud. 22:26, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come his normal image has mud? O.o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded @Sky sorry, I got it backwards... xP 01:41, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge/blur the mud some more so it looks less like tabby patches and more like mud? :3 23:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little bit of waste around the border of the image. From the mud, I would assume.. 03:05, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:01, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading well. 22:46, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think what you might be seeing are the burn patches I put on the mud patches, because I think the shading looks fine. 01:01, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. 03:55, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Ratscar (Alt.W) ~ Approved
He was described as a russet color. Comments? 23:15, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. 23:40, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Up the red a bit please? It looks a bit too close to the warrior image for my own preferences. Russet's a fuzzy color, you can bend it to suit your needs a bit. 23:50, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but he was described as fox-red, and red is basically a dark ginger, so shouldn't he have stripes? 17:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

When I was looking at his page, it said he was described as russet, not fox-red. 19:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Russet is reddish brown, not ginger. 21:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:10, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and darken it on the haunch. 16:31, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading. 23:56, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back~ 18:27, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:21, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. 03:55, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Pounce (Ro) ~ Approved
I named his file wrong DXXX I wll fix it ;.; So yah... Comments? 00:22, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink 01:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  02:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes. Make his pupil look somewhere else as he was described with a lazy eye. Make the tooth more visible. Smudge the back stripe and thin it out some. Lighten the shading on the legs farther away. 03:12, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is stunning. 8D Could you maybe at some highlights or something on the back so it stands out that it is more of a stripe and not so much darker shading? Breeze whisker  04:02, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  16:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little more. 01:25, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the haunch shading a bit. 18:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuplloaded *failed the shading* DXXX ;.; 01:56, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 03:52, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. 03:55, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Boulderfur (W) - Approved
DDDx Please comment on this if you want to : / 01:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded there was weird stuff above his eyes. If changes don't show, contact me for link. 02:22, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:24, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to replica the shading on the apprentice 02:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is a bit blotchy, as is the ear pink. Can you even it out a bit? 03:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Round out the shading on the shoulder and lighten the fron of the legs. Breeze whisker  04:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:30, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more. 02:23, 06, 04, 2012 Reuploaded (here:http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767461998000.png) 03:19, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink a bit please. ^^ 13:43, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded c: tell me if changes don't show 14:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it OwO 19:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink. This is good~ 00:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I colorpicked so I might not change it 12:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...going in a different direction from Rowan, desaturate the earpink ever so slightly? (just make it a bit more gray) 15:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Oh sorry, I meant gray XDD 16:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also, make the earpink more triangular and define the light source. 16:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Still, define the light source. 21:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink more. 22:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. My pixlr is acting up again =_= contact me for link if changes don't show 23:13, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 03:42, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. 03:55, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) ~ Approved
Yay :) finally done. Although I don't think I did such a great job with the shading >.< 17:21, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

this is over the limit and will be declined. 17:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Not needed anymore, ,17:53,April 6,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 18:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean by "over the limit"? 19:36, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

The limit for numbers of images that can be up for approval is 40 at one time, and this was over 40, but its fine now. Blur the earpink~ 20:56, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Oh ok- I forgot about that. Re-uploaded the shading wasn't defined cause I only saved the shaded version in psd :S gee, I'm so smart. I blurred the earpink, too, which I forgot to do in the first place 23:24, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the tan waste on his back. 23:44, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back paw closest to us. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  00:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded not sure if changes are showing 01:11, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up a tad. 11:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:39, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the tail shading. 16:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded changes should be showing. I didn't Blur the tail shading much because I don't think it was really necessary. 17:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the ear farthest away look tinted green o.O Also blur the highlights and lighten the tail shading. 19:22, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think changes are showing yet... I didn't blur the highlights cause I think they're fine. 19:28, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights look too concentrated. At least lower the opacity on them.? 23:37, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. better? (Changes should be showing) I also made the grayish parts more beige to match his other chararts. 00:56, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think, though it might just be my computer that ther is waste inbetween the ears. 01:19, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I kinda looks like that, but it's just the pixel blank 01:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the highlights a bit more, blur the shading, smudged the ear pink down, and on the tip of the tail there are lighter pixels where it looks like the shading was erased. 03:38, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Going along with the "shading erased" that Pouncey mentioned, it's like that on a few pixels on his left legs, on the edges. 13:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 14:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wonderful, Dewstar. CBA? 03:40, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Approved. 03:55, April 11, 2012 (UTC)