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Bluestar (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Sandstar, then further tweaked by Echoheart and Bramble, needed thickened and blurred shading. I think I failed at this. Comments? 02:58, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the tail shading and leg shading some? 17:21, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading too. 18:07, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blah... 23:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does this not look the same colour of blue as the others? Sky-Stupidly  Spring...✿ 02:01, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sky's right, it doesn't. Can you lighten the whole thing and add/brighten the highlights (I know they usually aren't mandatory, but all of her other chararts use them and otherwise it won't match.) 14:34, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I suck with highlights. 18:29, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the feet shading or lighten the shading on the top of the legs. 22:57 Sun Nov 13

Brighten the highlights a ton, it still doesn't match. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are hardly showing. 04:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Feet shading still needs to be darkened. 00:26 Tue Nov 15

Oh, and she needs a torn ear as well. 00:34 Tue Nov 15

One thing, with highlights I just really can't use them without having bad shading. I will try to blur the shading, but I hope everyone can understand that highlights are bad for the chararts I make. 03:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I guess it's better now...

Make the ear nick a little thicker. 05:11, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The paws still need to be darkened. Just to clarify, right now they're lighter than the rest of the legs and that makes pretty much no sense with the current light source (or what appears to be the current light source). They need to match the colour at the top of the legs if not be darker than that. 04:50 Wed Nov 16

Reuploaded. 01:31, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. 08:05, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is a bad charart.. I darkened the shading. 05:21, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit. -- 12:16, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart on the tear please. 22:21, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:22 Sun Nov 20

Brighten the highlights more. They still don't match the other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:08, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I just found out that I can only have 2 images up, I have 3. 00:47, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'd like to take this over. :) I'll go reserve it now and reupload it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tweaked from the original image, not Stone's, but it's still tweaked. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  05:44, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, blur the tail shading/highlight (if that is a highlight o.o) at the tip just a smidge. Lovely job as always. -- 00:49, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more like her deputy and leader images. 03:54, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (W) - Tweaked
Shading needed to be redone, and I accidently erased the earpink so I had to do that along with the shading.. Sorry. Dx OA was Icecloud33. Oh, and according to the new rule do I have to do her kit image along with this one? M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   20:20, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the shoulder highlight more circular. 21:12, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And lighten the earpink a tad. 21:18, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

And no, you don't have to do her kit if you just tweaked the shading on this one. It's only if it's a major change. You're more than welcome to reserve it, though. 03:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, thanks for telling me. ^-^ Hopefully I blurred the shading enough, and I brightened the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   03:26, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit more and thicken it on the shoulder a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:51, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hopefully this is working, I'm new to GIMP... M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:13, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Forgot about the waste.. >.< M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:17, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could use a bit more blurring (gaussian blur) and center the earpink a bit. :3 16:15, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink too. 23:58 Sun Nov 20

Reuploaded Decided to re-do the shading, didn't really like it here :P This time the earpink stayed xD M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   21:36, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. It looks solid. 21:50 Mon Nov 21

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   22:10, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 22:12 Mon Nov 21

Is it okay if I withdraw this? I'm just not really interested anymore.. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   23:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Nevermind, I guess I'll keep it. I hate giving up even on a small project. xD  01:33, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken and thicken the shading along the back please? 18:57, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done :3  14:48, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

You still need to center the ear pink and blur the shading. 16:07, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the earpink and blurred the shading. 21:12, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad and make the ear pink visible. It's visible but it looks odd. 23:03, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading and fixed the earpink. 01:43, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear-pink a tad. 16:56, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Pixlr fails at blurring xD  17:10, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Beechstar (L) - Tweaked
I just burned it to make it darker and tweaked the eyes 'cause they didn't make sense to me XD 03:16 Sat Nov 19

OA was Echomist 03:17 Sat Nov 19

Wow, that was fast :D Perhaps just a little darker? 03:18, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hey, I all I had to do was burn it XD 03:24 Sat Nov 19

The little strip of fur between the front legs seems odd as in there's no shading or it doesn't match the rest of the pelt. Perhaps darken that little section there. Awesome! 04:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:59 Sun Nov 20

Blur between the legs just a little bit :3 22:27, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:08 Tue Nov 22

Could you try and dull the highlights? If you don't want to, then that's fine. 18:55, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

If nobody sees a problem with it, I'm just going to redo it. The shading is weird, there's a lot of blurred lineart, and triangle tabbies aren't the most genetically accurate. Speak now or forever hold your peace. 08:53 Wed Nov 23

Go ahead Wildy =3  15:18, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Kay this is just taking up space. I haven't had the chance to redo this 'cause I'm still grounded from the computer (all my edits are done illicitly) so somebody can archive this and I'll repost it when I have the time. (Don't delete my reservation, though!) <span style="">04:31 Fri Nov 25

Reuploaded Nevermind XD <span style="">07:11 Sat Nov 26

GORGEOUS! :o Just make the earpink stand out a bit more from the pelt. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:29, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Ki) - Redone
Had to look more like his warrior charart. OA was Insaneular, and I'm guessing it was tweaked later on by Goldenpaw. I got all the colors from his warrior charart. M is   t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   14:30, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little more. 16:50, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done, how does it look? ^-^ M is    t y pe bb le   ♪Goo d day♪ just go with |undefined the flow   17:11, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the stripes a tad? Looks great! 21:36, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink on the right ear. <span style="">22:19 Sun Nov 20

Reuploaded Defined the stripes and the earpink. 01:39, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Stripes need to be a lot sharper to match the other images. <span style="">03:28 Wed Nov 23

I'll try to work on it Saturday, since tomorrow is Thanksgiving, sorry.. Dx  03:49, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Re-did the stripes. 00:59, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little bit. 13:13, November 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink a tad. 16:22, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken/define the shading? 16:52, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the shading. 17:02, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink to make it stand out more. <span style="">22:46, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

Sandstorm (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Bramble with major tweaks by Elorisa, needed to match her other images. Comments? 18:42, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading/define the shading in the eyes. This is lovely. :3 18:45, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Defined the eye shading. 19:45, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger. It looks a little small. <span style="">22:16 Sun Nov 20

The base coat looks a bit greyer than the warrior. Either saturate it, and try ad match best you can, or color pick from a place there's there's not shading on the warrior image, like the top of the muzzle. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:37, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Stoneclaw? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:30, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I am still here. 18:06, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (R)~ Tweaked
It needed tuffed ears. 23:42, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add more "poof" to the brown ear. <span style="">23:48 Sun Nov 20 Tufts. <span style="">00:21 Mon Nov 21

His ear farthest from us(his brown ear)needs to look more tutfed. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 12:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, that's exactly what Sweetflower said. Please refrain from repeating comments ;3 -- 21:57, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 01:48, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the tufts look more like the orange/yellow ear? <span style="">02:30 Thu Nov 24

Not really with the way its shaped. 21:21, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste. <span style="">22:51, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

Whitewater (W) - Tweaked
Yeah, I know it's smudged. There's no other way I can't make the shading so obvious on a white cat xD Anywho, needed darker, blurred, and thicker shading. OA was Bramble. 21:45, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, I dont see anything wrong othr then darken the shading at the tail base - 21:54, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Try your best to blur the shading/highlights. 08:36, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...why not just re-do it, but follow the exact same style. This needs to be blurred a /lot/. 18:53, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redone, I'll lighten the shading if needed. 20:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Please on the neck and hindquarters just a little. ^^ <span style="">02:28 Thu Nov 24

Center the ear pink and blur the shading a lot. *steals* Tis mines! 04:53, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Don't know if changes are showing. -- 21:34, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Did you copy the eye style? It looks different. 21:46, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

No, but I can if it's needed. I'll try to find another charart with that eye style and copy it :P -- 21:48, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

She's supposed to be blind in one eye. Use this image. 21:52, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the whole image a bit, by just going over it with the dodge tool once? It looks too gray. <span style="">22:56, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

Graymist (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Darkhallows and it needed to be long-haired. Comments? 20:43, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose gray and brighten the earpink just a tad. Great job! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  01:46, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 17:55, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a tad? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 21:56, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:04, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading & highlights on the tail - 02:43, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  11:28, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lionheart (W)- Tweaked
Bahahaaha. FAIL. xD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 21:36, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

To avoid Atelda eating me, Oa is Dawnfeather. He needed thicker fur around the neck. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 22:09, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

No offense...but how is this thicker fur? I had no idea what it was until you posted this comment. Imo, it looks nothing like fur. It just looks like a black zig-zag...like a black scar. I'm not sure how to fix it, because I'm blank of ideas right now. Icestorm not signed in

I suggest thickening the fur on both sides of his neck. 22:42, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

How's this? (fail. X_X) <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">She who Trolls everything 22:43, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Better, just erase the lines in the middle of his neck. 00:52, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 00:57, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It didn't change o.o 01:02, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Changes might not be showing. :P <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 01:06, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

But I'm looking at the thumbnails for this version and its previous version, and they're the exact same. Normally, even if changes aren't showing, the thumbnail shows the changes. Anyway, I'll just wait :D 01:09, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the changes are showing for me, and sometimes it doesn't even show in the history. :/ <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 01:13, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Put some shading on the fluffeh part. :3 04:21, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. X_X <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Eh heh heh. 19:28, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It kinda freaks me out x3. Add a bit more shading? Kinda hard to tell where it is for me. 23:07, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I know, eh? XD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 23:30, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaller. <span style="">00:20 Fri Nov 25

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 01:18, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay the colours are starting to look kinda green-tinged... is it just me, or does anybody else see it? I'd say if you won't change the colours you definitely need to darken the shading and considerably lighten whatever shading you have on the edges of the mane-thingie so it looks like the parts closer to him are in shade and the parts that stick out aren't. I don't know if any of what I just said made sense XD <span style="">04:40 Fri Nov 25

If you look right above the part where you shaded on the tuft, you can see a drastic change in.. I don't know if that's shading or what. But can you smooth it out? You'll know what it would be if you see it xD -- 21:29, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's because there's highlights all over the image, but not on the edited part. Add some there. 23:29, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 00:46, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

The mane's lineart doesn't seem consistent with the rest of his lines. I think, to remedy that, thicken it everywhere except the tips so it flows smoother. It doesn't seem that me mane flows with gravity much either, it needs some pull on it. A great reference for maned cats are Maine Coons. They have lush ruffs around their necks and are a good example on how gravity would work on them. Great job, by the way. 00:53, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I failed at it... <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 01:16, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you planning on doing all his images? Cause I actually really wanna do either his deputy or his kit. XD I didn't know till now that we were actually giving him a mane. :P Anyways, lighten the whole image a bit to match the deputy image. Good job. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  09:34, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the mane a different color than the actual pelt? <span style="">22:54, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

Jag (Ro) ~ Redone
He was on the redo list because he needed to match his caveguard. The OA is Frostheart♥. Comments? 23:55, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Where's the earpink? XDD <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Trollsky <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> She who Trolls everything 23:58, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud on the forehead. ^^ :P <span style="">01:52 Thu Nov 24

Define the highlights on the back leg's haunch. 23:05, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm dumb. I forgot teh earpink. -_- 01:00, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink, mon ami? :3 <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Troll-de-mort <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Eh heh heh. 03:09, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (W) - Tweaked
I made him gray-white, before he looked like gray-cream. OA is Darkhallows ,10:59,November 24,2011 (UTC)

Two of his paws are darker than the grey on his body. Lighten them up. 19:43, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,20:45,November 24,2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad. 22:58, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white into the gray on the tail a little bit more. <span style="">23:00 Thu Nov 24

I think there's still a bit of cream around the eyes. 11:30, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ,14:11,November 26,2011 (UTC)

Grasspelt (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Brambleclaw14 and it needed to be long-haired and match his warrior image. Comments? 22:38, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpinks. 22:56, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. <span style="">01:09, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011 01:09, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 11:28, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. 14:15, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:50, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Snowflake (Ki) - Tweaked
She looks so cute! Original artist was Mistpelt, and the patches had to not look like blotchy shading. Comments? 17:17, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Could you darken the gray a tiny bit, and define where the white meets the gray on the head. 20:05, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:34, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

This is cute! Define the earpink. <span style="">22:58, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

Poppycloud (Q) - Redone
Okay... HUGE tortie fail... Well, it had to be redone. OA was .Skystar. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 21:54, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste above the tail and define the shading a bit. <span style="">23:00, Sat, Nov, 26, 2011

Scree (CG) - Redone
Original artist is Ashshadow, and it needed mud, stripes to be seperated, and earpink needed to be tweaked. So...yeah...eww. 23:07, November 26, 2011 (UTC)