Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

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Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Gah, this sucks. Comments and/or critique?--Shaf Girl  23:21, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:23, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and darken the shading-- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:25, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear fathest from us a bit.  Dawny  23:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken it, and blur it. Add shading to the head. ♥Ice shine★  00:01, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ah noes... the <3 colour is being lost by the removal of the shading. Definitely darken it and thicken it. The original shading was the right colour, just needed extending to other areas. -- Sandy star 08:38, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I completely redid it.--Shaf Girl  17:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   19:36, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the muzzle and tail. ♥Ice storm★  12:11, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little.  Dawny  05:55, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl  23:06, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. --Willo wwh isp 16:17, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading some more. Night Fall 05:23, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

A bit more shading on the nearest ear, perhaps? Out of my way, Kittypet! I'm not in the mood! 14:12, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl  17:44, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too noticeable. Frostheart ♥  20:17, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shading can be a handful you might need to make it thinner but not to thin just enough to make it more natural but dont put the whole circle on there it will look dark maybe set the exposure to at least 47 or 48 so it is not as dark then blur itTry that  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 00:58, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

And make sure that the hardness of the brush is around 50 or lower, it gives it a more natural look. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   14:02, July 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:24, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Still a bit too noticeble Umm i dont know i ran out of ideas to help XD  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 03:11, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think blurring it more will help. Shading will always be noticeable. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  15:42, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I honestly don't think I could blur it anymore. Pixlr is weird on my computer.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  05:07, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandy. I fixed up the shading and added some highlights. I also made the white chest smaller-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:30, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  19:32, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  19:46, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make the ear pink smaller. ♥Ice storm★  19:55, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I needs to be blurred. And the ear pink is .... to purple.21:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC) Darkhallows... Mew?

The earpink doesn't look purple to me. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  21:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blure the highlights more. - <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:red; Background:black;border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">Willo <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:green; background:black; border:2px dotted; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:green;">wwh <span style="font-family:Cocoa; color:blue; Background:black;border:2px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">isp   22:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened shading a bit, fixed highlights, and fixed ear pink a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:08, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

darken the highlights some. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:10, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  22:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need some blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   00:19, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:01, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur white transition. ♥Ice storm★  02:16, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:54, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the highlights are really bothering me. They're too bright and concentrated, and they don't look real, no offense. Make them more like Sloefur's or similar to that, if you can. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:41, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are blotchy-looking Tawny SMEASH 22:28, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I switched to my other computer to see if this would look different than on my laptop, and it did. I tried fixing up the highlights more-- n i g h t  s h i n e  01:41, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions Night  Fall 00:44, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred white transition-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:49, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Since Nightshine is away at camp, I could take this over, unless anyone else is willing. W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   03:15, July 17, 2010 (UTC)


 * You can if you want to although I don't doing it if you don't. The shading/highlights need blending. -- Sandy star 14:04, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded. I re-did the whole thing, and just tweaked it, which one do you like better? W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   19:44, July 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * The right one the highlights are less concentrated  Fuzz  Leader of loners 16:35, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right, but blur the highlights and ear pink on it.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 01:21, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuloaded. '''Okay, goin' with the right one! Anything else? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   15:49, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 16:11, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Omg nevermind Nightfall already said Blur white transition Sorry  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 14:45, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   14:44, July 21, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blend the earpink a little more =) This is very good. -- Sandy star 13:35, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition, and add some shading to the paws Night  Fall 22:12, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Sorry it took so long! A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  19:05, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little off- just its shape, it seems to dip down a bit on the top if you know what I mean. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ dovesong ♫ 03:47, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I got what you meant. A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  21:59, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar - Tweaked


Saw that this image needed to be tweaked and so I decided to do it. Had to zoom in the find the original shading so I just took it away and redid the whole shading. The white was kind of hard to do with the original creators choice of color so let me know if I need to do that some more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd darken the shading. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:00, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better but you should darken the shading Clarr issa! ☆ My talkpage! 10:42, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">Out of my way, Kittypet! <font color="Cyan" style="background:Purple">I'm not in the mood! 19:32, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur the patches a little more, because the transition is stil kinda hard, darken the shading as the others said, and there's a spot beneath his chin and to the left that cuts off. :3 Looks good though. ^-^  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 16:30, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

I honestly think the patches look a little too blured.  Dawny  04:16, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded--  Gladiator  Band Geek  04:34, July 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blend the haunch shading, but this is really nice =) -- Sandy star 18:45, July 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * How's this?-- Cchslogo.gif Gladiator  Band Geek Treble_and_bass_clef_heart.png 02:27, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

The patches look TOO blurred, and the area around his eyes looks kind of odd. Oblivion 02:34, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

I disagree, Oblivion. I think it looks really good. ωiſd ɦɛɑrŧ  20:15, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

the patches around the eyes do look odd Rainear   be as silent as rain

The blurring looks kind of inconsistent with each other. Like on his right arm, part of it is really blurred, and another part isn't. Does that make sense? Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  00:03, July 27, 2010 (UTC)


 * By his right I hope you meant our left. Sorry for the lateness in this. Band camp has been kicking my butt this week. Updated-- Cchslogo.gif Gladiator  Band Geek Treble_and_bass_clef_heart.png 01:15, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Uh... no. I meant our right. The blurring still looks kind of blotchy. Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  10:58, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MCA) - Tweaked
My first tweaked image. Original artist Minnowclaw. Comments? •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 13:32, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit; she looks nearly black. Otherwise good :) insane  brick'd 13:38, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. •Maple fern• Happy Canada Day! 13:48, July 18, 2010 (UTC)

She only has one hind leg. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 20:47, July 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * That's because when this image was originally made, the injured foot was thought to not be visible from this angle; now that it's been changed and it's visible from this angle, add the hind leg again.  I c e  t h r  o a t   Just a   simple   sig...


 * Lighten her just a bit more, she's still to dark. Influx Lennon -   Ringo's Wife  10:22, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Lghten the herbs a bit  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 23:50, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
 * Add shading to the herbs. -- . Silverstar  . talk   12:50, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Purdy - Redone
Okay, on the Nominations Page, it said his style needed to be re-done. So here he is. Original artist was me. ♥Ice storm★  00:27, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pinkish.  Dawny  00:36, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

You mean, lighten it? ♥Ice storm★  01:19, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

No, just define it, because it's blurred too much. I think that it will be the right pink once it's defined.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 01:33, July 19, 2010 (UTC)

His patch of fur on his hind leg looks sort of cartoony to me. Maybe make it look a bit. . . fluffier? A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  16:55, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Um..Mouse, what do you mean? ♥Ice storm★  00:02, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look natural. A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  23:25, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandstar12. I added the bushy tail. Comments? Mõŏń    ۞   15:04, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks kind of strange... Try making him longhaired like his kit image and it'll look great. :3  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 15:50, July 22, 2010 (UTC)


 * The original artist was not me... I just reuploaded the image when renaming it last year. I don't quite remember who it was without looking it up in the archives (which I don't have time to do right now - I will later). I think this image just needs the longhaired blank as Mumble says, rather than messing with the lineart. -- Sandy star 15:55, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

The original artist was a user called Sandiwolf, who left a while back. You did a nice job on altering the tail lineart, but I agree with the others you can just change it to the longhaired version. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 21:55, July 22, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blur the ear pink. ♥Ice  storm★  02:21, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * Was it really neccessary to alter the lineart? Hmm, I think you should also add the fluffy chest stuff, since the rest of his images do now.XxdovesongXX 20:58, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * It was neccessary to alter it, and I really like how it looks, But maybe JUST add the bushy tail? I think it looks awesome. W    a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   22:34, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

It does look good but his other images have the longhaired base so this one should too. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:41, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree that the lineart shouldn't have been altered. It's pretty nicely done, but I think it'd be best if it was just changed to longhaired Night  Fall 03:33, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'm so sorry but I can't make it as good as this, I'll save the image before it and you can witdraw this... :( I can't really reamke it... so yeah. Mõŏń     ۞   05:40, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

You don't have to remake it. All you have to do is layer a long haired blank over thos and redo the tail. Ashshadow Ag 17:14, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) - Tweaked
Original artist was Sandy. Said it had shading issues, so I fixed them, as well as fixing some blurred lineart and blurring a black patch that had no blurring at all. I also added some more shading and highlights. Comments? W   a  t  e  r   bender <font color="#009dff">MouseHRULES!   02:33, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should darken the shading a bit; it's hard to see. And there is very little shading in her eyes. She also kinda looks like she's cross-eyed. Sorry, a lot of crituque O_O Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  19:34, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Shading in her eyes? I don't think we need that...blur the patches. ♥Ice storm★  19:46, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not exactly shading, but different coloured patches so it doesn't all look the same. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  21:06, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Her left pupil is weird. Make it two pixels wide. And make the nose black, since she has black fur around it. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 01:21, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you added ear pink to her left ear. It doesn't need to be there. <font color="#1db0bf" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ dovesong ♫ 00:41, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I didn't add any ear pink,m it was already there. I fixed the eye and ear and also the nose. Anything else? A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  21:56, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Her right eye looks like she's cross-eyed. Make the pupil more to the middle. Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  00:09, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) ~ Tweaked


Original artist was Icestorm123, I believe, hope I spelled that right. I made him longhaired. I dunno if the tail stipes are right, but the tail took a while to get at least almost right. x3 Comments?  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 16:27, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

He's supposed to have blue eyes right?  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 17:08, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

They are blue, they're just very light. You should make it a darker shade of blue and make the earpink smaller. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  19:35, July 23, 2010 (UTC) You should also make the stripes look like his warrior and deputy images. These are too light and don't have the right design. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  20:05, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * nods* I was the original artist. Birdpaw, the eyes are blue, ice-blue in fact. I think you should darken the tail stripes a tad. ♥Ice  storm★  19:39, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think im going color blind then :/  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 03:09, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

On it. :3  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 17:14, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine. Make the ear pink smaller. ♥Ice storm★  00:03, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

No offense, Icestorm, but the stripes need to be consistant with the other images. Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  01:20, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Redtail (D) - Tweaked


Original artist was Shimmerpool. I blurred the shading immensely and reworked it so it would be less blotchy and dark, and I made it so it would be somewhat similar to the warrior image. Further suggestions? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 23:14, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink seems really dark, but that may just be me. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 23:21, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should blur the chest shading. ♥Ice storm★  14:06, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Really nice image, Bramble. If you're working off the warrior image, I'd suggest smudging the patches on the head a little more. Otherwise, it looks great. insane brick'd 14:12, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Insane. I tried to smudge the patches some, lightened the ear pink slightly, and blurred the chest shading. --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 17:17, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

His chest highlights seem to have a gray-white spot, Maybe blur it or darken it? A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  18:51, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think the colour of the ear pink is fine, it's just a teeny bit too big. Otherwise, great charart! <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ dovesong ♫ 03:44, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Shrunk ear pink slightly and blurred the white spot on the chest - it was originally there for consistency with the warrior image. -- 23:16, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Longtail (E) - Tweaked
I didn't do much with this one as it's so lovely. I just added a torn ear. The original artist was Mosswhisker I believe. -- Sandy star 19:11, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Yep, I was the original artist. The only thing I can see is there's a pixel of black above the erased part of the ear. Good job! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 19:59, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

I believe earlier we talked about possibly adding scratches to the eyes. . . A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  23:05, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry for the delay. -- Sandy star 11:41, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

It says he is a pale silver on his description. <font color="cornflowerblue" style="background:white">Rain breath  09:45, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Sandy star 12:55, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Since what book is he pale silver?? EDIT: This is Birdpaw  Sand  It's not your fault Texas 15:28, July 28, 2010 (UTC)


 * Since the book that is referenced on his page =.= Must I clarify everything? I'm just doing as I'm told here. If you can find a counter-reference to him being silver then by all means do as I never imagined him to be. If it turns out that there is an isue with his colour, you know where the revert button is. Are there any other comments on this other than whether he is silver or brown? (sorry to sound impatient, but if I'm to finish this it needs to be in the next couple of days as I'm on holiday from Saturday.) Also: Birdpaw, you don't need to write that it is you... we can see that from your signature which is the whole point of having one. If there is any doubt as to who you are then maybe you should consider changing the text so that it reads your username... just a thought. -- Sandy star 16:58, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the shading a bit. Nice job. ♥Ice  storm★  17:37, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well; I suppose since the book says he's silver, then I guess he is :/ But I've always pictured him brown...I dunno. This is beautifully done anyway. Make the scar on his eye thinner though Night  Fall 23:49, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather (Ki) - Tweaked
Blurred stripes. Comments? Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  00:46, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

The right (his right) paw/leg has some white pixels in it. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  00:49, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Theres some blurred line-art on the top of the head, and on the haunch.  Dawny  03:46, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Argh! My awful first Charart! Darken the ear pink some more. Blurred lineart on the back foot. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 17:29, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

There is some blurred line art on his left (front) paw/leg Rainear   be as silent as rain

On the backpaw there is some gray out of the lineart  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 23:49, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Webfoot (E) - Tweaked
Original artist was Shady. He needed a torn ear. I also made the ear pink more of a pinkish color than purple color that matched the apprentice image, and I fixed some blurred lineart. Comments?  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 17:11, July 25, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded. Whoops, I missed some blurred lineart on the tail, but I've fixed it now.  I c e  t h r  o a t  Just a  simple   sig... 17:13, July 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the ear pink a bit more Mossy   I fight to live I live to fight!

Not that this has anything to do with your wonderful charart, but where does it say he has a torn ear? There's no citation on his page. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  17:22, July 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah....I have read all the books and i saw no torn ear  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 23:48, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

In Twilight during the badger attack is when it was torn. Blur the stripes on his back a little bit. -- . Silverstar  . talk  12:48, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

I looked through Twilight and it definitely doesn't say he has a torn ear. The only time he is mentioned during the attack is when he is chasing away a badger with Firestar. Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  00:23, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe (A) Tweaked
I think Minnowclaw was the original artist, correct me if I'm wrong. I darkened him, blurred the shading and highlights, blurred the stripe, changed the eye color, changed the ear pink color, and made the ear pink smaller :) Comments? Night  Fall 01:41, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

The shading makes it look like it's in layers: His stripe, the shading, then his regular pelt colour. Maybe spread out the shading some? Oblivion   Fly my pretties, fly...  01:44, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nightstar (W) Tweaked
I'm not sure who the artist was on this one :/ I darkened him, and changed the ear pink color to match his leader image. Comments? Night Fall 01:41, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. And center the ear pink. ♥Ice storm★  01:45, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I darkened the shading, and I tried to center the ear pink Night  Fall 02:17, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should darken the overall image. It sorts of looks dark gray. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ dovesong ♫ 03:37, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. -- Skydragon Wings of flame... 19:18, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

This must be my computer, but I can't see much shading. Maybe it's just me. Moon   flight    Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ   17:19, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Nightcloud (W) - Tweaked


I was the original artist. Reworked shading and highlights, desaturated for consistency, and changed eye format. Further suggestions? --<span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#3861DE; ">Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 03:20, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Bramble i cant see anything wrong maybe blur the highlights but thats it  Sand  I'm a new level of awesome 23:47, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but maybe lighten it a wee bit so that the lineart is more visible. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ dovesong ♫ 01:33, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Brightheart (Ki)- Tweaked
The original artist was Spottedwing. I blurred the patches. Comments? εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:41, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! I think the ear pink is a little big, though, and it could use a bit more shading. But that's just me. <font color="#1db0bf" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ dovesong ♫ 00:42, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. ♥Ice storm★  14:23, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches a bit. -- . Silverstar  . talk  12:45, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, slightly more, blur the patches. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:15, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Toadstep (W) - Redone
The original artist was myself. The shading was really blotchy, so I ended up redoing the entire image. Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 20:58, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job. I'd say to add shading to the face and darken it on the paws, and blur the ear pink. ♥Ice storm★  14:22, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added shading to the face, darkened the shading on the paws, and blurred the ear pink. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 16:44, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tad brighter. A N D Y S C H L E C K<font color="#009dff">Mousehis now obsessed!  21:47, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink eaiser to see. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:14, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Brightened and defined the ear pink. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 17:15, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MCA) - Redone
Original done by Minnowclaw. I couldn't save the image, so I redid it. Comments? Geor ge 23:37, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too blurred, and hard to see. And there's a white pixel on the front leg farthest from us. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  00:00, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more stripes and thicken them. Also, lighten the herbs. <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ dovesong ♫ 03:41, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the pupil. Lighten the ear pink, and add some more stripes to the back. ♥Ice storm★  03:42, July 27, 2010 (UTC)

He's not supposed to have a pupil he's blind  Sand  It's not your fault Texas 15:24, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

He is supposed to have a pupil. Blind doesn't mean he doesn't have a pupil. Ashshadow Ag 16:22, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

He looks as if he's look down at his tail. Make sure he's looking up. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:11, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) - Redone
Orignial artist was Mossflight, I think. Okay, I tried to thicken and blur the shading on the regular image, but I couldn't without screwing up the image, so I ended up having to re-do it. Construcments? ♥Ice storm★  23:57, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading - it's hardly noticible. Oblivion  Fly my pretties, fly...  23:59, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, darken the shading. And blur the ear pink. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:10, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Ki)- Tweaked
Original artist was Night Shine. Comments? Ashshadow Ag 00:00, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should make the lines of the spiky fur texture a bit darker, and blur the shading a little bit. Also, I think his nose should be pink since there's white around it <font color="#26b1c8" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:#ffffff">♫ dovesong ♫ 01:35, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the parts where the dark grey meets the light grey. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 08:05, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more. And as Goldenpaw said, the light and dark grey transations.

Crowfeather (A) - Tweaked
He needed to be lightened a bit, but I also made his ear pink match his warrior image and blurred the shading more. Suggestions? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 08:05, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

You may need to blur the back shading some more. But I love this! Like all of you artwork! -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:06, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Is that any better? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 20:16, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Away
Hey guys! Sorry to be pretty inactive latley, But I've joined a lot more wikis so I've had to work more. Anyways, I'm away from three weeks in Spain and I belive that Tweak Week finishes while I'm gone. So please don't decline Speckletail (Q), as I will try to finish her ASAP when I return.

See you all after 3 weeks!

Thanks much, -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:04, July 29, 2010 (UTC)