Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Strikestone (Ki) - Redone
OA was Burnt, redid the design. 19:35 Fri May 11

Maybe make the white on the belly a bit more noticeable? I love this design! Needletail 🐾 #Litten 18:15, May 12, 2018 (UTC)

Still working? Needletail 🐾 #Litten 15:25, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

I'll repost soon. I need to get cleaned up, had a really messy day at work lol 20:45 Tue May 15

Reuploaded 21:05 Tue May 15

Tigerstar (TPB) (De) ~ Redone
Redone to match Bramblestar and Hawkfrost. Colors from Icy's files. He may look dark cause of the shading. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 00:24, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Wow this looks really nice! It looks like he has a scar over his eye, or is that something else? And then I think the stripes on Bramblestar and Hawkfrost seem thicker overall and maybe add more stripes to the tail if you can fit them

It's a scar. And I got everything from Icy- but I can thicken the stripes a tad bit I can't fit more on the tail. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 05:27, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Cosmo is right. All the stripes are from my file - and I did Bramblestar’s images so I matched them. 10:05, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah I just thought Bramblestar's warrior looked darker than this and I believe it's because the stripes are thicker and denser on that, and on Bramblestar and Hawkfrost's the tail stripes seem much denser than they are on this

Re-uploaded. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 01:53, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Could you also move the scar from his eye to his nose

Whoops- forgot about that. Needletail 🐾 #Litten 03:21, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 17:46, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes thicker/denser at least a little bit or at least acknowledge my comment

Can I have a second opinion? I think they're fine tbh. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 19:54, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Snowfall, please stop. That was extremely hosile and, quite frankly, a lot ruder than you needed to be. There was zero reason to add that last part of your sentence.

I think the stripes look fine. 23:45, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (L) - Redone
Redone to match Bramblestar. 10:18, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

By the way, I will add more scars, I did not see it until now. 10:19, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 21:12, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Define the earpink? Not sure if you need to match Fox's images or if she needs to match yours but hers are lighter and you could define them by matching hers

It is the shading that is making it dark, and once again, I am matching Bramblestar. However I will define it. 22:50, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

I know you're matching Bramblestar but all of the Tigerstar images need to match each other, which is why I said the part about Fox and her images

Once again, it is the shading making it dark. 09:18, May 16, 2018 (UTC) I can see the ear pink just fine. It's just more neutral than some others. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 09:23, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Sunstrike (A) - Redone
OA was Ivy, redone by Sziri. 10:18, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading, maybe smooth out the cream on the forehead between the eyes, and maybe smooth out the body color and lessen the creamish mottles. It looks receeded on the other images. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:16, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: 21:09, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

There's some waste by the underside of the tail. 18:19, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Tigerstar (TPB) (Ro) ~ Tweaked


You'll have to match the scars to the depth. There's one over the eyes and some on the tail and sides. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 13:45, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Technically since I'm just tweaking my images and not redoing them, aren't mine still considered as first in the set?

I didn't know! Sorry. I'll change mine. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 14:09, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

File names for both of these need to be Tigerstar (TPB); might want to go and upload under the current versions on his page already, just so we don't have to shift categories/delete and things for the file name to be correct.

Jeez, I forgot about the name change *.* I'll do that later, sorry for the inconvenience.

Tigerstar (TPB) (DF) ~ Tweaked


The colors do not seem to match Hawkfrost or Bramblestar - are they the same? 15:21, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Yes they're exactly the same. It's probably shading over the pale parts that makes it look a bit different.

Yeah, you are right, sorry, I thought it was not, had to lighten my computer screen. Can you smooth out the shading on the back paw farthest from us? 23:27, May 15, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Strikestone (A) - Redone
OA was Shinx, redone design. <span style="">21:06 Tue May 15

I know it may be hard, but could you define the shading on the tail and face? I love this design! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 03:43, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Hoot (R) ~ Tweaked
for the black placement on the < leg to match, a goof on my part originally

Dawnpelt (Q) ~ Redone
Redone to match rogue. The stripe on the tail is what makes it darker, so I won't lighten it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:24px;text-shadow:4px 5px 6px #b278ed;">Needletail 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:5px;">#Litten 02:17, May 16, 2018 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt Ki) - Redone
meh. <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">(  <span style="font-family:century gothic; text-shadow:#000000 0.0em 0.0em 0.2em; color:#438134; font-size:85%">16:59, 5/16/2018  <span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; text-shadow:#000000 0.1em 0.1em 0.3em; color:#438134; font-size:86%">) ​

So, I may be wrong here, but white tabby is a varient on silver. So I think this would have black/dark gray stripes. Every "white tabby" that shows up when you search comes up with dark stripes, and a very pale silver base. <span style="">19:52 Wed May 16

No offense to your knowledge, Sun, but I think I'm gonna keep the base white. I'll darken the stripes, but I feel we should be sticking with what was actually said, regardless of what it would be realistically. I say this because of the high volume of unrealistic descriptions in the series, and I mean no harm.

....I didn't say her base needed darkened....just the stripes. White tabby is a dilute of silver, so the stripes would be dark. I said nothing about the base, just that white tabbies have extemely pale bases and black stripes.... <span style="">22:29 Wed May 16

And speaking of "what is said vs realism" then the black tabbies wouldn't have needed tweaking to have lighter stripes by that argument but 🤷 <span style="">22:31 Wed May 16

OH I MISREAD THAT, my bad. I thought you were asking me to darken the base. I can darken the stripes, sure. Also, yes, they do need lighter stripes; most of mine do, minus Crowtail.