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Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:09, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Try...Making the floof more fluffy and shaggy. It looks spikey now. :S 18:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Dazzly? o3o 09:59, 14, 06, 2012

Snake (BC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. 21:01, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? 21:08, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And do kittypet kits need a collar...? I can't remember x.x 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

He wasn't a kittypet, he was a rouge or something, he was part of BloodClan as a kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 22:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Unsure on changes. 22:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 22:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Kill ze waste. 22:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the black a tad. 02:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiiiny bit lighter, so the white is lighter. (But then you might have to define the shading on the back. Doesn't make sence. =_=) 07:19, 08, 06, 2012

Re-Ups^ @Dazzy, I'd rather not smudge because it doesn't look smudged on the rogue and loner images. 21:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is kind of flat... Can you define the lightsource? 14:17, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Black and White cat shading. e.e 18:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still looks flat. Define the 'highlight' and enlarge it, and darken the shading. 18:37, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I tried by best. e.e 17:54, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on ---> side. Skt Spoilers... 02:57, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

It may be just me, but there seems to be darker colored squares on the chest... ouo 03:49, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I can see it too, but it looks like a square of lighter pixels. owo Also define the shading on the white. Skt Spoilers... 04:10, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (Ki) - Redone
You are looking at failure. So hard to draw dem stripes on dis small, cute, little, adorable kit blank! Meh. Redone to match other images. Comments? 04:49, 09, 06, 2012

Define the shading. Nicely done.

Adorable <3 Maybe blur the stripes a Tiny bit, And possibly make his base coat more, cream? Not sure if thats the right word, more like his other images, looks a bit pink to me. -- 06:04, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Thanks. ^^ Raven, I wasn't quite sure what you ment, so I just airbrushed the coat color with a lighter, pinkish color a bit. 06:23, 10, 06, 2012

Define the shading more, and perhaps thin it out a bit as the color looks off cause of it. Also, where's your light source? I can't quite tell. 09:19, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit? 19:33 Sun Jun 10

Reuploaded -  Just redid the shading. 02:37, 11, 06, 2012

There's a little bit of waste around his tail. 19:26, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  05:58, 12, 06, 2012
 * Changes ain't showing. 06:02, 12, 06, 2012

I'm not sure if it's the base pelt or the shading, but he looks too dark. lighten the shading if it's that~ Skt Spoilers... 13:21, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  I believe it's the shading. x3 09:10, 14, 06, 2012

Sunstrike (A) - Tweaked
OA was me and the patches needed to be blurred more to match the warrior (I have my reservations about the warrior looking too overblurred but that's probably just me)  05:36, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

While this is up, could you brighten the brown just a tad to match, and blur the earpink? 09:18, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (W) - Tweaked
Needed to be browner; OA of the most recent version was me. 02:28, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely as always, Loon~ Define his scars abit, can't really see them. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 03:08, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:31, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less... pinkish, now that the base color has changed. 02:41, 11, 06, 2012

Can you blur the tail and neck shading while your at it? Skt Spoilers... 22:36, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W) - Redone
Redone for many reasons, including blotchy shading, over-blurring of the grey, and such. I copied and pasted the shading from Patchpelt's warrior, so I'd rather not touch it unless absolutely necessary. I did the same with the size, position, and blurriness of of ear pink. I'm not a huge fan of how I did the scar. Comments? Breeze whisker  19:10, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Just in case, since it won't show for me, change are here. Breeze whisker  19:12, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful <3. Define the earpink and lighten the back shading a bit. 20:13, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I defined the earpink, but unless there's a secondary light scource, or he's actually in an environment where there would be backlighting, I don't believe the back would be any lighter. Breeze whisker  22:35, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar just a bit? This is lovely~ 22:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  22:39, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

'Tis lovely. Blur the shading on the paws and the arms. 02:27, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  15:51, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad? It seems almost black on the shaded parts of the drey. And blur the shoulder and haunch shading a bit. Lovely breeze, as always. ^^ 22:52, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge the white face a bit to match the kittypet a bit more. <333 Georgious Breezy. 08:55, 13, 06, 2012

Reuploaded. I think the haunch shading is fine, though, so I didn't do anything with it. Breeze whisker  02:37, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Near the top of the tail looks like some miscolored pixels. Can you fix those? 19:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur stick out more like the other images, rather then curve a bit. It should basically stand on end, like he got electrocuted or something. 22:50, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not good at tail tweaking... o3o Withdrawn. 22:59, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 99.58.201.247 23:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * That was me. o.e  23:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Whitefang (W) ~ Tweaked
OA is me. (not Minnow, since their image was //never// used, and I was told I could claim it) I made the epical tail more realistic, and changed the shade of brown/tweaked the shading.

<333333 Lighten the midriff shading a tiny bit. Wonderful as always! 20:11, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Lovely<3 21:37, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define the shading a bit. Beautiful. <3 23:09, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Leafy has returned* Hmm blur the shading a bit. , 17:30,June 12,2012 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine.

No, I agree. Can you blur the neck and shoulder shading? 22:49, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Having issues today... e.e

Tallpoppy (Alt. Q) - Redone
She was redone because her pelt color didn't match her other images, she was seen just without stripes, so she should be the same color etc, just without stripes. Also, her eye color and ear pink didn't match, and her shading was hard to see. 13:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the belly shading. Also, can you fix the eyes? It looks as if one of them is staring in a different direction than the other one. Looks good ^^  19:40, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a little bit too. :3 20:14, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the lighter belly. Since this alt is going off appearance, that's not optional anymore, and should be removed. 22:48, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 04:49, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat shading some. Skt Spoilers... 06:28, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 05:39, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Whitefang (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Purplemoon, and the tail stripes were unnatural. I also changed the ear pink and eye colors, as they didn't match the warrior.

Maybe add a little more depth to the shading (your choice) and blur it some. 12:26, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I didn't actually touch anything other than the tail and paws...so I'd rather leave it as it is. However, if others agree, I'll gladly fix it.

I think the shading's fine. 19:24, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Ki) - Tweaked
Just added another layer of shading to darken it. Comments? 17:33, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think there is a waste around, dont kill me if Im wrong. 20:19, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (A) - Redone
Added a new layer of shading. Comments? 22:46, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly lighten the shading by the tail a bit? 22:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Eh. The shading on this is really iffy....Icy, if you want to re-do it, that way it won't get tweaked in the future for the same thing, go right ahead.

Re-Uploaded: Shading on gray and white apprentices is hard... 23:51, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the kit. The kit isn't being redone, therefore the pattern stays. 23:54, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Fail on my part. 00:01, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Move the white on the tail to the other side, make the white on the face centered like the kit, shrink the white on the haunch a bit, and get rid of the white on the shoulder that's connected to the chest. 00:10, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: 00:22, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste by his face. And if you can, could you darken the shading a little? Breeze whisker  02:39, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pattern still doesn't quite match. Try copying it from the old apprentice image. The pattern from there was fine, it was just the shading that needed changing. 04:29, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

This was ment to be tweaked, not redone. x.x If this stays up, make the tail gray go all the way to the end of the lineart, get rid of the gray inbetween the eyes down to the nose, bring the gray down to the haunches and belly and there seems to be some stray shading (dunno the word xD) around the haunches and front left forearm. :/ <span style="">09:42, 14, 06, 2012

Berrynose (Ki) - Redone
Colors needed to match other images and shading needed to be redone. OA was Nightfall101. Comments? 23:16, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (L) - Tweaked
Needed scars and torn ears. Lots of OA's, but the last one was me. I'd rather not change anything other than the scars and ears. Comments? 23:20, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I /think/ the torn ear on our left is ment to be torn <-- way. :/ <span style="">09:50, 14, 06, 2012