Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Darkstripe (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Latest OA was Thistleshine, tweaked to be a dark gray tabby. Also, is it possible for me to post the other two images at this time? I've got the images done, but I'm not sure I'm allowed to put them up with Slate also being approved. 20:03, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

You can have two tweaks up at once. Would you object to defining the tail shading for me? I really can't see it at all.

Reuploaded. Thanks for the info. I defined the overall shading, as I was having trouble seeing it as well. 21:04, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Snowed said they couldn't see the earpink on either image. 13:51, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

Snow Falling on Stones (TB) - Tweaked
OA is Duck and I tried to define the shading, but that just made her even grayer, so I rearranged my shading and highlights and stuff.

Darkstripe (W) ~ Tweaked
Latest OA was Stoneclaw, was tweaked to be a dark gray tabby. Comments? 21:10, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

On this and the rogue, I can't see the ear pink anymore. Change the coloring a bit more so we can see it better?

Reuploaded. 13:52, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

Talon of Swooping Eagle (CG) - Tweak
Tweaked for white looking gray. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:38, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Would you object to me asking you to define the overall shading? It appears rather flat in some places, like the tail and haunch, and I think could use a bit of tweaking. If you don't want to, that's fine and it can be renominated later and such.

Sure, I can do that. :) I'll reupload later today. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 14:45, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

Rippleclaw (W) - Redone
Before you ask, no, David did not make this. I did, and I'm extremely proud of it. The older image had too many issues, and I've always wanted to try a classic-ish tabby....so here we go.

As i said before, this is gorgeous =). Define the front legs shading, and possibly the facial shading? (if there is any, of course) 07:41, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had already defined the shading on the legs but forgot to unhide the layer, oops.

Wind (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA be me, tweaked for stripes. I tried. Comments? 15:02, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

I think there's a smudged style texture on the stripes. If you smudge them with a hard edge brush, I think you'll get that look. 21:38 Tue Nov 11

Shrewtooth (Alt W) ~ Tweaked
OA be me, tweaked to define the shading. 15:52, November 11, 2014 (UTC)