Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Waspwhisker (KP) - Tweaked
Darkened and defined shading. OA was DJ. Commentos? 21:49, September 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit please. 15:11, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  21:05, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it a little and maybe make the shoulder and back highlights connect to fit the light source better? 04:37, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Ashfoot (W) - Tweaked
Dat shading needed blurring and blending. I don't think my blur tool worked that properly. >.< OA's were Sandy, Cloudy and Mooneh. Comments? o.e 06:16, 16, 09, 2012

Lighten the shading on the front legs. Looks almost like her feet are darker...o3o 09:07 Sun Sep 16

There is also a part of a front leg with no shading. owo 15:51, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

DJ, would you just like the .xcf so you can redo the shading?

Blur or tone down the chest highlight a little. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 18:28, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Cloudy, I sent you and email (or at least I hope so), and I failed. >.> 08:46, 19, 09, 2012

Nope, you didn't fail. I got the message, and I just sent you the .xcf file.

Squirrelflight (A) ~ Tweaked
Made her dark ginger. Now bask in it's glory failness :P OA was Shelly. 16:41, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shush, not failness. De-saturate her a bit more. 17:55, 16, 09, 2012

Reuploaded Why thank ya :3 De-saturated her, hope it matches more now. 20:05, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Runningbrook (A) - Redone
Redone for a more realistic pattern. OA's were DJ and Leaf-storm. 18:09, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Why does she have a brown belly? 18:11, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think it's actually brown... anyways, can you define the stripes? I can't really make them out from the rest of the pelt.

Define the haunch shading more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 18:15, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

I used a brown color to shade. I dunno, the cats I was using for reference 1, 2 seemed to have a brownish color in their shaded parts so I just thought I'd see what you guys thought. /flails 18:19, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I really don't want to define them anymore - she'll look too dark. 18:25, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Did you forget the earpink? ouo 18:32, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

No, there's earpink. But could you smudge the pelt downwards to show a little more of it? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 18:34, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

No, and I think it's fine. I'm not going to make it fill the hole inner ear. Cats have fur there. 19:04, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Could you at least make it a bit more noticable? I can see it now, but it's a bit hard to decipher. 19:41, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

This looks almost exactly to one of my cats omg Can you define the shading a bit more? 22:28, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I saturated it a bit more. 01:25, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty! Darken the stripes on the tail a touch to match and maybe smudge the dark tail tip. Imma steal now, 'kay? 03:00, September 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you. <3 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Boulderfur (W) -Tweaked
OA was me. I defined the shading. Changes may not be showing. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:55, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of dat waste. 21:00, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Even out the shading. 21:31, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:38, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Waste. 23:19, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 01:47, September 18, 2012 (UThttp://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki_talk:Charart/Tweak_Page?action=edit&section=8C)

Reuploaded. Changes not showing. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:25, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

They are for me. There's still waste, and define the shading a tad more. 02:41, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is as dark as it can go without looking awkward. And where's the waste? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:46, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

In between the haunch and the leg, and the eyes look darker than the apprentices'.(Though the eyes could just me me.) =3 02:52, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

In between the haunch and leg is where the shading is. There's a highlight on the apprentice's belly because the light source is underneath the cat. That is my shading placement choice and I'll be reluctant to change it. The eyes just have more highlights and dark spots than the apprentices (I played with them to give them more depth) but I can change them... if the majority wants me to. I'm fond of them. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:37, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Duck means there's waste in the spot in between the legs. It's not supposed to be there, so please get rid of it. It doesn't matter what the source is, that waste shouldn't be there. And speaking of sources, this isn't a proper light source. Could you possibly change it?

Can you blend the shading a little more? And it is, Duck just has two conflicting areas of origin, on the shoulders, arm, and haunch, it suggests a lower light, but on the face, it suggests a light higher up. It's an easy fix, on the haunch, curve the shading on the underside of the haunch more, and on the arm, define the shading on the backs and shadow the bottom of the paw. 05:57, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Ohh.... oh, sorry, I read it wrong. Sorry, sorry, I thought he was talking abot darkening the shading. I am sooo sorry, duck! I hope you forgive me ;.; Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 21:39, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by the head,chin and (his) right ear. 23:45, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Nutmeg (Ro) (Ro) ~ Withdrawn
OA was Ravensong, redone to match the queen and the shaidng needed tweaking. Comments? 07:50 Mon Sep 17

The shading needs blurring and it shouldn't have a reddish tint. 02:37, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

The patches still aren't smudged the same direction. Also add a little more white to the tail tip. Not much though. Maybe a couple pixels wide.

The smudges almost look pixily, or not exactly pixily but look...computerish? (it makes no sense, I fail at explaining). Play around with your smudge settings, get a feel for it and try different techniques and it should come out natural looking. 05:53, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I suggest finding a reference picture to help you with how the way the fur naturally runs, usually helps me :) -- 06:19, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Bah, I'm withdrawing. 11:41 Wed Sep 19

I'll take over. 19:24, 19, 09, 2012

Frostfur (Ki) - Tweaked
Darkened the shading and also made her eyes a darker shade to match the other images. 02:35, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it a little, and add some more highlights to the face and legs. 23:43, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes may not be showing 03:50, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) -Tweaked
tweaked to have mottles. changes may not be showing yet. I fail ;.; Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 02:44, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the mottles and blur the white on the front paw.

Beetlewhisker (Ki) - Tweaked
The most recent OA of this image was me, his shading needed defined. The original file is on my flash drive and I'm too lazy to locate it so I added a new layer of shading |D  05:50, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar(L) - Tweaked
Defined the shading, OA was Ivy. Comments? 12:23, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Could you try and tint the shading so the color matches? Right now, it really doesn't.

Cloudpelt(D) - Tweaked
Tweaked for blotchy shading. OA was Leaf-storm. Comments? I don't like this. e.e 12:23, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Lighten the shading a tad. 19:24, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 21:28, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like the shading is edging away from the lineart just a tiny bit on ---> side. (Can't explain) Also could you blur the chest highlight a leetle? x3 08:59, 19, 09, 2012

It looks as if the shading gets lighter or darker in different spots... Can you fix that and make it match(?) better? 20:07, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (W) ~ Tweaked
I love this image. OA was me, and I tweaked the patches so they're less red, and redid the shading.

Could you make the orange less neon? This is very pretty =DD 21:23, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the orange a little darker. As Duck said, it's pretty bright. It is very pretty <3 19:42, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Snowfern you don't need to repeat what's been said. Can you make the smudging go in the same direction on the colored patches and the white? 20:06, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Jacques (KP) ~ Redone
Fail time. o3o Redone for his pattern and shading. Latest OA was..Rainly? 23:19, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading just a leedle bit. I love it~! 07:40 Wed Sep 19

Re-uploaded. Done. 10:21, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black a leeetle. Lovely <3 19:53, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) ~ Tweaked
Lol, so much Oakheart. Latest OA was Maplefern. Made darker. 00:36, September 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darken or define the shading. ;3  20:07, September 19, 2012 (UTC)