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Ravenpaw (Ki) - CBA
Alright. Now, before the queen rule and all of that, Ravenpaw wouldn't have gotten a kit image, but now, since a she-cat needs to have only been mentioned to be the mother of a cat and cats that are listed as the apprentice of a certain cat gets a pixil, there's no reason Ravenpaw doesn't get one for being remembered by Bluestar. Anyway, cute kit is cute :)  15:36, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

D'awww, he's cute~<3. Shrink the earpink slightly so it doesn't fill the whole ear (sorry if it doesn't look that way to you, but from my computer, the earpink looks big...ger than usual) and define it. Pretty charart is pretty 16:42, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's artist's choice. 17:09, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. 19:50, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Awwww cutie~ Blur the white a tad. 20:11, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a leeetle bit. 20:13, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading and blur the neck shading. 22:52, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail and chest markings more to match the other images, too. 02:18, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, didn't see Paleh's comment >.<  01:46, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the whole thing a tad bit? 02:06, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the legs a tad? Skt Like a baws  23:21, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Ivy? =) 23:19, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

I am. Sorry about that. D: I'll reupload tonight  23:25, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  05:15, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Ravenkit <333 CBA? 22:45 Wed May 30

Talon (Ki) - For Approval
Being smaller, his stripes would be thinner. Comments? 01:14, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think can do that... There's waste near/at the bottom of the image. 01:36, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes match a bit more, and add some more so it doesn't look so bare, and define/blur the earpink and thicken/blur the scar. 01:44, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the earpink a tad 02:51, 27, 05, 2012

This isn't quite 80%....so, you have one week to get it up to that level, or it will be declined. Anyways...define the ear pink..and the shade of brown doesn't quite match the elder...

Can you define the shading a tad? 23:50, May 27, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded 20:35, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste in the gap between his tail and body, and some by a paw. Skt Like a baws  21:54, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Add earpink, and the scar over his eye. 22:55, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

The highlight seems too tinted gray. If you use layers, for highlights, I suggest having the highlight layer mode on "Overlay." =) If it's already on overlay, then try having the highlight the same hue as the main pelt color; just a lighter shade. 23:17, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I see some earpink. Define it. 20:59, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Dazzle- I can have 2 kit images, so I believe that the one with the scar over his eyes would be an alt. 21:46, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

But when he was mentioned as a kit, he was mentioned as having got his scar then. Not about to get it. So I think he'd only get one, with a scar.... correct me if I'm wrong though. 22:49, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

But wouldn't he get one just automatically since he was described as being a kit? *cant remember* x.x  02:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

We don't do alts for scars anyway. But yeah, he should have one. 19:56, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
She was shown to be a light brown in The Darkest Hour, so Comments? 13:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Lighten it up and blur the shadin. Skt Like a baws  13:38, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color a bit more. 15:10, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

A lot more actually. This is in no way light, it's the same color as her main image. Also desaturate the earpink and thicken the shading on her neck/shoulder. 15:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png.

Reuploaded 20:24, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Nice, Moonshine<3 Blur the earpink and shading a bit and rename it File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png Just take away one .png. 20:29, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just a tip from an old coot. ;) I advise, with lighter cats, adding a second layer of shading where the shadows would be darkest, like at the base of her tail, back of her head, behind her front legs, etc. It gives the charart a more three-dimensional look and feel that might help out a bit. 20:37, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I changed the heading, since Mousefur already has an alt warrior. This is the second alt.

Blackclaw (Alt. Warrior) ~ Declined
He was described as a dark brown warrior in Fire and Ice; comments? --Starry Hawk My Talk!  21:26, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Nice<3 Blur the shading. 21:35, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Starry Hawk My Talk!  21:41, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Wait. I once saw that Cloudy had corrected a person before who thought Blackclaw was being called dark brown, and she said it was his apprentice being called dark brown... Or am I mistaken...? *backs away* 22:30, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

From Fire and Ice; Page 23: "Hello Wetfoot," replied Fireheart. He glanced at the dark brown cat. Wetfoot meowed, "This is Blackclaw of RiverClan." --Starry Hawk My Talk!  22:32, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

He doesn't get an alt for this. I forget the reason (look through the declined archives if you want to see...), but this alt was put up like 4 or 3 times and got declined because this isn't alt. I'm sorry, but I'm going to change the heading unless another disagrees. 23:01, May 30, 2012 (UTC)