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Poolcloud (Star) ~ For Approval
-- 20:35, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear and define the shading depth? 20:45, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define eye depth too, a tad bit. 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit 20:56, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups -- 21:51, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference. 21:53, 5/06/2017

Define the light on the tail, define chest and tail shading. 21:58, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a little too bright, earpink doesn't seem to match the other images, there's waste around almost the whole image, and define shading depth there are also some unfilled pixels in the eyes that are supposed to be white

For the eyes and ears, I colorpicked them. But I'll check into it again. --  23:34, May 6, 2017 (UTC)

Redone Great stupid me deleted the xcf and didn't even realize :C Here's your redo I really liked the first one. ;-; --  00:01, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink is uh... leaking? remember to blur things with a smaller brush.

@fox, if you mean its not covering the whole ear, it is not a requirement to fill in the whole ear with earpink 01:23, 5/07/2017

Reups Actually, the earpink color was leaking past to the back of the ear so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ --  01:52, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I honestly can't tell what's shading and what's the pattern. Define the shading and then the shading depth as well? Also brighten the white a good amount, it's looking silver-gray 16:04, 5/07/2017

Reups --  16:31, May 7, 2017 (UTC)

I'm having trouble seeing the shading (besides the tail and <- paw)

Gray coloring looks a little off - it seems just a bit duller than the others. Also, I think the gray could be more smudged in appearance, like the others

There shouldn't be any gray on the forehead. It should only be on the ear and the muzzle. Also, the <--- rump gray patch is leaking near the lineart on the top 17:04, May 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the color in the <-- eye. The pupil blocks it out. 01:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:43, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading. 12:13, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Theres waste by the butt 13:45, 5/09/2017

Is there a specific way to define shading. I've tried smudging but that doesn't seem to work..--  22:04, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

You can increase the opacity, or if you've already done that all the way duplicate the layer and adjust the opacity on that one

Dont forget your signature ya rando :P Also to define shading, you can also add more shading overall 23:50, 5/09/2017

Reups --  20:44, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the pattern overall and make it sharper like the other images.

Reups --  02:30, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink in the <--- ear 02:35, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more. I can tell it's there, but it's kind of all over the place 02:43, 5/11/2017

Is there chest shading? If not, add some. 02:46, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  03:17, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define flank shading? Nice. :3 03:22, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  04:02, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

The placement of the gray doesn't match completely. Especially check the warrior image, as you can see the difference between the shades better there, and also how there's a more defined patch of gray on the face.

Define the shading more 01:29, 5/12/2017

Reups --  02:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

Ok I think the gray should match the elder's image since it was lightened/tweaked before the others and if that's the case then this is too dark, also the gray looks softer than the other images, and it's still kinda hard to tell what's gray and what's shading on the chest and front legs

Well, I was just asked to match the warrior image so I'm not sure what to do when critiques contradict each other :/ --  16:05, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

The critiques, at least the recent one where I said to match the warrior image, don't contradict. I was talking about the gray placement, such as on the muzzle (which from what I can see, still hasn't been done). Snow is talking about the coloring, which is a separate issue, and also the coloring in other spots not previously mentioned.

There's a stray white pixel on the <--- paw. 21:08, May 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading more 21:31, 5/15/2017

The shading on --> side of the head looks a little dark, maybe lighten and smooth it a little? 13:15, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like defining isn't the right word for this, but expanding is. I've noticed that the artist repeatedly "defined" the shading on the same spots when they should've expand it instead. That's why the shading looks pretty dark and not visible in some areas. It should be expanded on the tail and stomach.

Reups --  21:04, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 21:06, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

There's a few pixels of grey in the area behind the <- front leg. I think you could smooth that out a little or get rid of it. I can put a red circle on it if you'd like. Branchwing (talk) 01:05, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the legs, chest, and belly area and lighten the shading everywhere else 04:16, 5/18/2017

I think it looks too dark compared to the other images, but forgive me if it's just my screen or something.

Reups --  20:34, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

There's some hard-edged shading on the arm, see here http://vvcap.com/5NI5dU5r7SI 21:07, 5/19/2017

Reups --  14:44, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

The shading still appears to be leaking by the <--- arm. 15:48, 5/20/2017

Reups --  00:09, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten tail shading on the patch of shading the --> side near above the chest. Also, the --> left paw looks as though it has dapples on it, is it supposed to be like that? Sorry if the last part was rude. :P 02:35, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

No one ever corrected me so I think I'm right that the gray should match the elder image, which is significantly lighter than this

On the ---> ear, near the tip, it looks like there's a lighter spot on it, try to fix that so it matches the rest of the earpink. 13:33, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

elder was tweaked for pale grey first, so yeah match that one 15:28, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  22:46, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The grey on the tail looks dark compared to the rest of the images. It might be just the shading, but it still looks dark. So, could you possibly lighten the color there or just lighten the shading in that area? Branchwing (talk) 00:21, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out on the back, and perhaps smudge/or add some closer to the lineart? I looks like there's hardly any there and maybe smooth the shading, just a little on <--- shoulder. 13:33, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face a little, and shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart on the back a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:31, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups --  18:13, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

The flank shading seems too blotchy. 18:49, 5/28/2017

Reups--  21:32, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Tail shading could be defined, smooth shading on---> paw, fix the leaking shading on the same paw, smooth facial shading and define it on the --> ear better, define shading depth on the flank also. 21:54, 5/28/2017

Nettlepad (W) – For Approval
– 11:28, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the image. Try reuploading?

Reupload – 11:34, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Is there shading leaking on the back lineart or is that intentional? Please dont shoot me Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:58, May 9, 2017 (UTC)chat

Lighten or smooth out the shading, the dapples seem to melt into the shading. 12:06, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

define some of the speckles? 15:00, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 12:11, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading 13:32, 5/10/2017

Reupload – 14:41, May 10, 2017 (UTC)

Theres still shading leaking on the back and smooth the shading more 18:15, 5/10/2017

Define shading depth a bit

Reupload – 07:20, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and the shading on the paws. 19:45, May 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the patterning that's under the shading

Define the shading depth more please <span style="">01:32, 5/12/2017

Reupload – 07:18, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe recede the shading a little bit by the shoulder/lower chest area? 23:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink, and maybe define shading depth a bit more?

Please, explain to me more precisely. HOW concretely I define shading detph? – 14:23, May 13, 2017 (UTC)

I think a little on the legs will do tbh

What is mean "do tbh"? – 11:47, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

tbh = to be honest. basically im saying that you should just define the depth on the legs

Smooth the shading more on the base of the tail and everywhere else but the legs <span style="">21:32, 5/15/2017

Reupload Excuse me forcing you to endure me – 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading more <span style="">00:56, 5/17/2017

Define the speckles just a tad in the shading? 03:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

What means tad? – 10:02, May 17, 2017 (UTC)

tad means a little bit.

Do I have to do something with legs? – 07:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)

All you have to do is smooth the shading more over the whole image, and define the speckles a little bit in the shading <span style="">13:55, 5/18/2017

Reupload – 08:56, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you thin out the shading on her stomach a little? After that I think it'll be good to go. If I wasn't very specific, you can just say that. Basically what I meant is like the shading up from the haunch. 20:20, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

Can you darken the speckles even more? Also if you're American you might be forgiven for not knowing tad, it's chiefly british --

I am russian ::::\ – 13:44, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

I noticed no one ever answered your question about shading depth and I still think it could be defined so here's an image of one of the apprentice tutorials, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:BCPrincess73.tutorial.png, which mentions shading depth so I hope that helps you

Reupload Would you like some vanilla ice cream with chocolate chips? – 10:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

It looks white, and less creamy white <span style="">19:39, 5/22/2017

Smooth out the body shading

Reupload – 08:21, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

The shading could be smoothed more. 13:30, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

i dunno XXXX| – 15:45, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink more visible or define it a bit more? It's hard to see it on my screen. Unless others see it just fine on their screens. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:37, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

I do think it wouldn't hurt to smooth just the neck shading. 20:17, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Are you really sure? – 06:55, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

well people dont generally just say things for the sake of it so yeah they're sure lol. anyway to fix the problem just ligten it by like 10% or smth then gaussian blur if ur lazy and patch up the leaking areas. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:13, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload What means "patch up the leaking areas" – 15:49, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the earpink a little not more? I'm still having trouble visualizing it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 18:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the neck shading again and also smooth out the tail-tip shading? And also, to answer, patching up leaking areas is referring to the shading-away-from-the-lineart leakage that sometimes happen when gaussian blurring, so yeah.^^

Smooth out the shading on the hips and shoulder/chest a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:32, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload – 13:42, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define earpink more? 15:26, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit, it looks kinda dark to me. -- <span style="border-radius:1em;background-image:-webkit-linear-gradient(left,#d278d2,#7070ff);font-size:20px;"> Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  04:28,5/28/2017

After you define the earpink, smudge it a bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 00:11, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Moonflower (Alt. W) ~ For Approval
All colors came from Bluestar's queen image, which I still have the files for. Comments? 22:53, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on both the back paws? 22:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a little on the neck/upper back area? 22:58, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:04, May 15, 2017 (UTC)

Think shading's leaking on both front paws.

It's also leaking away from lineart on the back > of --> paw, near the rump area

Define the shading a little bit. Branchwing (talk) 00:36, May 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth also. <span style="">04:39, 5/17/2017

Still working?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  10:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry for the wait; I was on vacation in Florida, had very little time to work on this, and just got back home yesterday. Uploads should be more frequent now. 20:36, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

There's what appears to be highlights leaking on the belly. http://i.imgur.com/5nZCt6f.png Branchwing (talk) 21:26, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:34, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the highlights, especially on the haunch and legs 21:35, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I just got rid of the highlights. 00:57, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs. Branchwing (talk) 01:31, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 05:42, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

For some reason, it really looks like the whole haunch has a highlight or something, because it's a shade lighter than the rest of the image. So perhaps tone that down - just a suggestion, not if you don't want to

It's not a highlight, per say, just a section without shading that I'd rather not touch. 23:56, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

But it looks a completely different color than other areas that shouldn't have shading.

It's not, though. I believe that the shading is darker there than elsewhere, making the unshaded areas look lighter. I can lighten it, if you'd like. 03:34, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

But there shouldn't be shading in those areas, like near the chest fur. Comparing those two gives me two totally different colors, and even comparing the unshaded part of the tail and the haunch looks different. Unless those two areas are in shading, which they should't be; otherwise basically everything but the haunch part would be in shading and that makes no sense.

I don't know what to say. There's no shading or highlights on the haunch or the other lighter areas. I honestly think that the fact the shading on the haunch is darker than it is elsewhere, possibly combined with the texture, is making look lighter than it is. That seems to be the only explanation, and if it's not, I have no idea how to fix it. 03:44, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think just darkening the whole hatch by adding shading on top of that part would solve the issue, or trying to mess with the shading opacities in those areas. It really does appear to be two different shades - I don't think it just looks lighter because of the particular shading in those areas, from a basic colorpicking comparison, it really is lighter

Reuploaded. How's this? 19:54, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Perfect :) CBA

Why does she have blue eyes though? She's cited with yellow eyes, and I know she's been mistakenly said to have blue eyes before, but I thought we only added mistaken eye colors to alts when the mistakes happened in the same rank as the alternate image was. Both the times she is said to have blue eyes was when she was an apprentice. 23:46, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure; I was told to change Lionblaze's eyes from green to amber when I did his alt, yet no one said anything when I did Brackenfur's alts, two of which have green eyes and the other has blue. 23:57, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe a little more shading on the neck area? There's not much there and it almost looks like the shading isn't there. -- <span style="border-radius:1em;background-image:-webkit-linear-gradient(left,#d278d2,#7070ff);font-size:20px;"> Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  04:27,5/28/2017  04:27, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm going to keep the eyes the way they are. For now, at least. 04:38, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

I believe shading is leaking from back and tail, also maybe define the shading on the tail, and there's a weird dark line on -> front paw that should be removed (or smoothed if it's supposed to be there)

Honestly, given that it's an alt, I really don't think it matters that the eye color doesn't match. It's a charart meant to represent an incorrect description, so I think the eyes are fine as they are.

Reuploaded. I defined the tail shading, but I didn't remove any leaking shading because there is none. Not in the places you pointed out, at least. The texture just make it seem like there is. 03:45, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Skunkpaw (A) - CBA
Fail.

Very pretty! Maybe define the shading a bit, and there is a little white speck on ---> shoulder blade from the white on the chest. And maybe smudge the ear pink a little more? Keep up the good work! Cosmokitten (talk) 00:44, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Brighten the white <span style="">00:44, 5/19/2017

If I'm correct, the white on the <-- paw should cover all of it. 00:46, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Shouldn't there be white on the stomach as per the StarClan image? <span style="">01:24, 5/19/2017

re-up Thanks Cosmo!

Oh dang I forgot about the earpink. I'll get to it later

Maybe blur the white or smooth it out on the stomach and chest. Looks too sharp compared to the StarClan <span style="">04:19, 5/19/2017

re-up

Could you smooth it out ever more? Not the white you smudged apart, but the white on the chest just looks like a strip of color. <span style="">17:12, 5/20/2017

I'll just ask Sziri how they did it, otherwise I'll just fail that.

re-up Hopefully it looks better now.

Perhaps define the shading depth a little? 15:00, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Also I realized that the nose wasn't filled in.

Can you define shading a little more and smooth it on the back leg closest to us?

Brighten the chest white; looks grayish

re-up may or may not have reupped before.

I think the white on the chest could be brightened a little more. 20:32, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

re-up So many layers. ..

Define the shading on the back half of the cat. Idk if it's just me, but I can barely see any. 03:31, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little bit. 19:45, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

White looks gray everywhere but the <--- front paw and <--- toe on the other front paw (I hope that makes sense). 01:48, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg and hip and on the face. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:37, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

re-up I have at least four layers of highlights on here, please tell me this is enough.

White on the chest and especially the belly still looks gray. 01:34, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Okay, so can someone provide me an alternate shading reference or some way to help the white look white? Because I'm tired of just putting highlights over and over again. Sorry if that came out a bit irritable but I have a lot of highlights on there so idk what to do.

Well I always found that highlights don't work very well/at all when trying to layer then w/shading, because white = white and highlights don't change that. So that might be your problem. Just lighten the shading on the white by a lot, is all. Unless you're adding high-ish opacity highlights on top of the shading, it won't work.

Sorry if this has already been asked, but are you shading your white and black on the same layer? If so, try using separate layers; one for the black, and another for the white. That's what I do and I never have any issues with the white looking gray.

re-up Messed around with the thing a bit. Thanks Snowed!

There we go! This looks wonderful. CBA?

Okay, gonna be the unpopular opinion here, but the white on the chest is more smoothed out on the StarClan. <span style="">04:46, 5/29/2017

re-up Nah you're right. gives cookie to broken

Re-CBA? :)

Daisytoe (A) ~ For Approval
Disneytoe's my last image before I become a warrior! Go go go! --

Good job Neon! Maybe define the eye depth, unless there is some already. Cosmokitten (talk) 10:18, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Decided that even though there was depth that it needed some definition. Fixed. --

Define the shading a bit? I like this, good job! Rainbowmistake (talk) 11:55, May 19, 2017 (UTC)chat

Smooth/smudge the shading on the top of the hindleg closest to us and the base of the tail. 13:26, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth quite a bit, it looks flat. 19:35, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like all the shading could be smoothed out tbh <span style="">19:48, 5/19/2017

I believe the mickey mouse head on the chest is facing the wrong way. On the warrior and kit image, the head is facing sideways. This has it facing right side up. The patch on the back should be further up the back near the shoulders and the ears on the mickey head on the haunch need to be smaller. There should also be a tiny patch of gray on the furthest back paw. And I feel like all of the gray could be a tiny bit softer. 20:07, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Define shading depth more. 00:12, May 20, 2017 (UTC)

How's this? It turned out I errored when re-uploading, so my first re-upload was the same image as the first. --

Maybe desaturate the purple? I had the same problem, don't worry, but it seems too light/colorful. Maybe darken in a few ticks? And smooth it out? <span style="">15:47, 5/20/2017

Re-ups --

The shading could be smoothed out on the belly, and > half of the cat overall

Define the shading, the shading depth, define the eye depth, smooth the ear pink. 14:46, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste by the tail. <span style="">19:37, 5/22/2017

Still working?

Re-ups sure i am --

I don't think it reuploaded correctly - It looks like the same image as the one before. 09:37, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

On the mickey mouse head on the haunch, the ears need to be smaller in comparison to the "head" circle. 15:24, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the upper back, it all looks a bit hard-edged. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:39, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups --

Smooth the shading a little bit more. 02:46, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading depth

Re-ups tfw you're ready to re-up but then you see "define depth" --

Define the shading a little? 13:07, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Jessamy (Ro) ~ For Approval
I waited 4 days, so I pretty sure I can repost this now. ErmineGlow (talk) 15:22, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

If you still have the gray a reddish tint, you need to match it to solid gray to the other images, the shading looks blotchy so smooth it out, define the shading depth, and define the light. 15:42, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I might have to re-do the shading ErmineGlow (talk) 21:41, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

The image is still tinted red, could you please fix that? Smooth out tail shading as well. Branchwing (talk) 21:57, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Should I alter the tint again? ErmineGlow (talk) 23:49, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light abd define the shading depth. 23:52, May 21, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Le better? ErmineGlow (talk) 02:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define light more, mainly on the legs. 02:12, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:14, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs and on the back. 13:26, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:52, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

There's lighter parts on the legs? If those are highlights, smooth them out a lot. 01:09, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reups look better now? ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the legs. 22:02, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

dull down the highlights `

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 01:36, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Thin out the shading? It looks a little blocky. 02:25, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Adding onto Shypaw's comment, nearly the entire image looks under shading? Maybe expand the light source in a few places? I'm not sure if that's what Shypaw meant or not 03:08, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I'm not sure I like the highlights anymore. :/ ErmineGlow (talk) 12:53, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge/smooth the shading out on the back legs, near the flank, along with the shoulder, and maybe define the shading depth on the neck, just below the head? If I'm wrong then ignore this; her other images don't have highlights, so this wouldn't have any. 13:54, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:10, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

There's shading waste everywhere surrounding the image

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 21:15, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

It looks like there is still a little bit of a highlight on the front leg closest to us on my screen. Also smooth the shading on the said leg. 21:23, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

define the shading depth a tiny bit 21:33, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 22:24, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the hind leg closest to us? this is nice! 22:54, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thanks! ErmineGlow (talk) 22:59, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face and shoulder. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:40, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 23:45, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth just a bit more on the hindleg fartherest from us? 23:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 01:17, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

This looks really good so far! Smudge ear pink a bit? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 02:29, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reups There isn't a whole lot of room for smudging, but I tried. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:37, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

I believe there is waste beneath the hind paw furthest away from us. 05:58, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Also waste around the head, front legs, hind legs, chest, and possibly below the tail 06:14, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 14:46, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

There's some lineart missing from inside the front paw closest to us. 17:58, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 18:26, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and add more light on the face

Could you also define/add light on paws?

Reups ErmineGlow (talk) 12:15, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Expand the facial light - with that source, I'd imagine that the light would extend down to at least between the two whiskers.

Reups Is it better now? ErmineGlow (talk) 21:46, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Shyheart (Ki) - For Approval
First image as a warrior, right? 00:16, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading and define shading depth, smooth the ear pink. 00:17, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Add stripes. She was described as a tabby <span style="">00:22, 5/22/2017

I don't know if the fur needs to be wavy at all, if not just ignore this. Maybe make it a little browner? It looks kind of yellowish to me. 00:26, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Lighten it, because it seems too dark to be light brown. Also where did it say she was described as a tabby, Broken?

Reuploaded 00:46, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Uhh....I don't think the changes are showing?

Reuploaded I could see the changes fine, but I reuploaded just in case. Also, one reason it may not be showing is because I reuploaded just before I got your first comment, then reuploaded again, but idk. :P 00:53, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little on the face on on the top of the <-- front leg. Looks cute! 01:16, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 01:23, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Define/expand the shading on the ---> front leg. 02:01, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:10, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Erm, idk if you added stripes, but she was never called a tabby. Slightly wavy fur does not mean tabby. Not sure where Broken got the tabby thing from, though.

Reuploaded It was just really hard-edged texture, but it should be fixed now. 02:31, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on head/face, tail, and back paw?

Reuploaded 03:07, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

My eyes might've tricked me into seeing "tabby" I don't know, my eyes do that a lot xD The brown still looks tinted orange to me <span style="">10:32, 5/22/2017

There looks like there are a couple of bold spots of shading near the tail on <--- front leg and one on the hindleg, right next to ---> front leg. 13:23, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:58, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

It kinda looks like there's a random tuft of lighter fur in the > ear that shouldn't be there, but maybe that's my screen

Reuploaded 21:43, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Fixed a few things. 00:24, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on ---> leg, and maybe smooth out the shading a little overall? Nice image. 20:37, May 23, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 03:32, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice more Fixed some things. 00:42, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth 03:06, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:20, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little bit on the flank (or what it's called, I'm talking about the area above the back paw). 19:37, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:18, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the tail a little bit? c: <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 20:52, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:17, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail a little bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:42, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

This looks nice! Smooth the shading on the --> leg and define the shading depth on the head 02:27, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! 02:37, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Is the pupil blue or am I blind? Also I think shading is leaking on the tail

Reuploaded It's the eye depth that's making the pupil look blue. 17:36, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Honey Pelt (W) ~ CBA
gd this looks awful

Maybe define the texture a little bit, I can't really see it. At least, I think there's supposed to be texture on this based on the ES image. 20:53, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
 * Adding onto that, just wondering, how come the kit image doesn't have texture? Was it purposeful? 20:54, May 22, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded The kit does have texture - I still have the layers for it, actually. It's just not super super visible.

Make the stripes on the haunch go around the entire body, and give them slight variation.

Reuploaded

could you give the stripes a little more variation and make them a little bit more pointed?

Reuploaded I really hesitate to give the stripes very much more variation, seeing as the kit image's > side shows what this would show, and there isn't much variation there. And even on the ES there isn't a ton, and since that's a different side, it doesn't need to match 100%

Maybe define the shading depth a little? 03:06, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

There's some sort of light stripe or something on the chest that doesn't look like it's supposed to be there. Smooth that out? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:44, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded just a sharp bit of texture :P

Maybe define the shading on the paws just a tiny bit? Looking nice. 23:53, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded

CBA? 13:02, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Red Claw (W) - CBA
All colors from the ES image, since I can't remember where I placed the rogue and loner images... but since they're all by me, they have the same coloring.

Define and/or sharpen the texture? It's more visible and distinct on the other image. 15:00, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Define shading on the tail and the far front leg. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:50, May 26, 2017 (UTC) The shading could be defined a bit on the back leg imo. Looks like it's leaking <span style="">00:47, 5/27/2017

Re-uploaded. It's not leaking, just faint.

Smooth the shading a little bit on the back, it looks sharper than the muzzle, tail, legs, and paws. -- <span style="border-radius:1em;background-image:-webkit-linear-gradient(left,#d278d2,#7070ff);font-size:20px;"> Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  04:24,5/28/2017

Erm, the shading doesn't have to be the same smoothness throughout the entire image. Plus, I've checked on three different screens and I'm afraid I'll get told to define it if I alter how it is.

Yeah, it seems totally fine to me. The shading seems smooth enough, and it might fade into the pattern if Snowed smoothes it out more. <span style="">18:55, 5/28/2017

Yeah, I agree about the shading being smooth enough. CBA? 13:04, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Milkweed (W) - CBA
07:15, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

i know this pattern is goddamn hard to work with, but can you define the shading? I can't really see it on the image.

reuploaded 06:59, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

the ginger is definitely brighter and more visible on her other images. like its not so delicate if u get what i mean Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 10:16, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

no, I don't. 11:08, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

I think they're saying that the ginger here is duller than the ginger on her queen.

comparing the base I've got to the lightest ginger on the queen produces the same colour, so I'm not sure what you want me to do about it. 18:59, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

I know it doesn't have to match perfectly but could you possibly add a little more ginger to the shoulder and hind leg? It just looks like those spots have more ginger on the rogue

reuploaded 23:26, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ginger is showing a little too much on her face. I can provide the file for the queen and rogue if you like. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:51, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 22:35, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

not breaking the cba but jus clarifying i p much meant the same as what snowfall said. m bad. Life actually sucks 24/7  so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 09:28, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Star) - For Approval
06:06, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

lighten the shading on her main body?

Re-uploaded 22:43, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Give the eyes a little more depth? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 23:52, May 26, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:20, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe make her a little lighter? On the queen image it seems a little brighter although this may be because there's a lot of shading on the main body. If that's the problem could you possibly lessen the main body shading a little bit more so it looks brighter like on the queen image? -- <span style="border-radius:1em;background-image:-webkit-linear-gradient(left,#d278d2,#7070ff);font-size:20px;"> Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  04:22,5/28/2017


 * All of her colors came directly from the queen image so they match, brightness can be influenced by the lighting context an artist chooses for an image and the shading placement is fine. I use it on almost all my starclanner images 18:11, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reedshine (CotC) (Star) - CBA
Last image before warrior... right? 01:34, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth, lovely image! 01:36, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, smudge the earpink 01:37, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes seem just a little bit thicker than on her warrior. Congrats on two approved images! 01:43, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink on the ear frathest from us. Very nice job! ErmineGlow (talk) 02:29, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! 02:39, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head. 05:53, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

The pattern appears to fade into the shading.

Reuploaded Changed the layer mode of the shading layers, made making the pattern visible a lot easier. 14:38, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

This is really good, Branch. Job well done. CBA?

Ripplestar (DF) - CBA
All colors from his other image. 02:10, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the face shading? Very pretty ErmineGlow (talk) 02:12, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thanks. 02:18, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Nice. The dapples seem larger on the other image, and more clumped together. 02:40, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

This is a different angle so I didn't think it matter. If the face and front leg don't match i can fix those. 02:48, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

I agree with winter. A different angle doesn't mean you aren't required to match the style.

Re-uploaded. 14:17, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Lizardfang (W) ~ CBA
i mean this has been sitting around here for 2 years or something so why not just approve it?

Would he have his snaggle tooth or is that on the other side of him? ErmineGlow (talk) 02:51, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ye he would i guess

I know this will probably be difficult to do, but is there anyway you could define the shading on the front paw that is furthest from us? 05:51, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded no (jk)

CBA?

Pink Eyes (W) ~ Withdrawn
Second image! The shading is supposed to be kind of sharp and I hope I got the texture right, lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 04:55, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Define the texture? Also, are his pupils pink? In the ES they are, and I can't tell here. If they are, ignore me. 05:13, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is leaking on the haunch, and define the light on the tail, especially on the middle portion of the tail. This looks good! ^^ 05:49, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does it show changes? Can you see the texture more? I tried defining it/redid it better. And thanks Vec! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 06:17, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Could you perhaps expand the shading a bit more? And yes, I think the changes are showing, and you did great!

This is outstanding! Can you define shading/shading depth on the tail? 18:23, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded! '''Thanks!! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 19:40, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-ups again. '''Smoothed out back paw shading. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 19:43, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth face shading a bit

'''Re-uploaded. '''Added some tail shading to make it more visible and added some light onto the nose to show the bridge of it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:35, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

I think the front of his muzzle would be in shadow and can you curve the body shading to go with his...well body a bit more? 04:10, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Is this what you meant David? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:30, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

The muzzle in shading means cover it with, well then shading. I hope I make sense, I'm very tired. <span style="">04:32, 5/29/2017

I'm withdrawing to work on another image. My eyes are really bad with white characts. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 20:16, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

How would the title say "withdrawn"? I'm sorry it's my first time doing this. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 20:17, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Changed the heading. Not sure if I was allowed to, but I did it anyways. <span style="">20:21, 5/29/2017

Stormheart (W) - For Approval
I am in love with how the shading turned out. <span style="">13:14 Sat May 27

The eyes need to be amber. 13:54, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

I love how you shade! Maybe smooth out the shading on the bridge of the nose? What art program do you use? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 15:41, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

can you make her a little bit greyer? 23:53, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you ^^ I use Photoshop CS5 Pro and a Wacom Intuos tablet^^ <span style="">00:49 Sun May 28

Maybe define the shading on the tail and smooth out the shading around the neck area? c: I use SAI for mine, but your shading is awesomeness! Keep up the good work! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:37, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is as much as I would prefer to smooth the shading. I'm purposely going for a sharper, texture type of look. <span style="">22:58 Mon May 29

Dust Muzzle (W) - For Approval
It's been too long since I've done one of these. But now I'm finally free from school taking up my time. :P I'm pretty sure I got the pattern right. Thoughts? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 22:17, May 27, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a little? It's kind of dark. --

Define shading on tail a little

Is it me or is it just the shading, but the tail seems to be a different color grey than the main body. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 03:38, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

I think that's a mixture of shading and highlights. Jayie's shading always has tons of stuff that goes with it, including probably multiple layers of fun things. lol I love Jayie's shading so much.

Strong Pounce (k) - For Approval
ik there's waste. btw @minkclaw, if you want another shot at this image just pm me and ill gladly hand it over. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 14:02, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit, I like this :) Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:05, May 28, 2017 (UTC)chat

reup. i wish i had as much confidence in this image as you did lol ty   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 14:23, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Also maybe make the pupil a bit darker? Imo they look gray. And the shading on ---> coyld be defined? I can't really see it lol Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:50, May 28, 2017 (UTC)chat

Why is the heading For Evaluation? You've had images approve do in the past. Like Morningflower's star <span style="">18:47, 5/28/2017

I changed it to 'for approval' because what Broken said + this looks p good :)

reup ty spookycat :]   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 02:41, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Idk but the pupils look gray? This is amazing. 02:46, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

reup lol sorry i forgot to do it in the previous reup @rainbowmistake   Life actually sucks 24/7   so   <span style title="bob ate, ariel-ate."> lol 09:24, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading around on the whole body and head? I can't tell where it is on my screen. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 18:47, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Nettle (DTC) (W) - For Evaluation
-- <span style="border-radius:1em;background-image:-webkit-linear-gradient(left,#d278d2,#7070ff);font-size:20px;"> Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  20:00,5/28/2017

Define texture, shading depth and smooth out the shading. <span style="">20:07, 5/28/2017

Darken shading and define light on all legs/paws. 20:18, May 28, 2017 (UTC)

Wait, why did you post another image? You're suppose to wait until your other has been archived. <span style="">20:25, 5/28/2017

Whoops :-P -- <span style="border-radius:1em;background-image:-webkit-linear-gradient(left,#d278d2,#7070ff);font-size:20px;"> Bird  tail  - -  over   the   R A  I   N B   O   W  20:28,5/28/2017

Declined <span style="">21:28, 5/28/2017

... im too tired <span style="">21:30, 5/28/2017

Ratscar (A) ~ For Approval
04:40, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Am I being a dumb-dumb, or did you change the pupil style? I wasn't allowed to change the pupil style on Drizzlepaw, so I don't see why this would be an exception. <span style="">04:59, 5/29/2017

If there's already a set pupil style, like this blank has, then you're not allowed to change the eye style.

Reuploaded. I just thought since I wasn't actually changing the style as if to remove the lineart, and only add more in the open area, it would be fine. But I understand. Would I have to change Snowbird's apprentice image too? 13:59, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

There's some waste on the ---> side on the ---> ear and below and next the the back paw farthest from us. This is so cute! 21:23, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reup Thanks 22:07, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Cloudberry (TC) (W) - For Approval
I'm aware that the shading should be smoothed out 22:19, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ErmineGlow (talk) 22:21, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Is it just my effed up eyesight or is the nearest front leg pink?? <span style="">22:26 Mon May 29

It's pink, Sun. I used the wrong tool when smoothing the shading and it resulted in that. I just forgot to fix it lmao 22:29, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

reups 22:35, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe add more shading to the legs? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau 00:09, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

reups 00:25, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

This is going to be a little hard to do, but define the light on the front leg farthest away from us. 00:45, May 30, 2017 (UTC)

Swift Minnow (W) - For Approval
Bicolors really aren't my thing, but eh. 23:05, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define the texture. ErmineGlow (talk) 23:08, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:21, May 29, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? 00:08, May 30, 2017 (UTC)<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:20px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#beaubeau

Re-uploaded. 00:19, May 30, 2017 (UTC)