Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Crowfeather (W) - Redone
I couldn't tweak the old version, I just had to redo it. All the images have highlight problems if you ask me :p The artists range from Sandstar12, to Bramble, to Nightshine, and I think tweaked by Moonflight later on. 19:56, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather! So pretty. Lighten the entire thing and blur the edges of the shading, and lighten the ear pink. 20:49, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

If you do remember the rules, you are not allowed to redo things without permission. This should be declined, but hoinestly i dont care for this one. But if it happens again its declined. 22:48, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Who's permission? I couldn't tweak this one. It said the shading needed redone, and how was I supposed to do that without messing anything up? I couldn't do anything to the old image that needed to be taken care of like the blotchy highlights and shading. In my point of view, it should've been on the redone section rather then tweaking. 00:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

In any case, it should be lightened. He looks black. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 00:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, who cares? It's a solid cat. It's not like she redid, say, Spottedleaf or something, who's character has such a complex description. There's no reason to ask to redo a solid cat. The only thing you need to do right at this moment, is lighten it, as Sky suggested. 01:00, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:08, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink. 01:10, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a whole lot. 03:34, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:54, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad. 17:43, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:10, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ehh. 22:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Windflight(E) - tweaked
now onto the senior citizen version! (fixed shading)

OA=Minnowclaw - 22:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Blur the earpink. 22:57, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Ya want me to do what now? (Fixed SHADING) xD - 23:00, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:54, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Try match stripes with warrior image, more Leaf-storm,8:53,October 23,2011 (UTC)

lolwhut? Im just tweaking this, Leafstorm XD Oh, and shadings already blurred to the max - 16:06, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The old shading may not be blurred to the max if you just layered the shading over. Blur the old shading on the shoulder. It shouldn't be TOO hard to avoid the stripes, anhd really, who cars if a litle tiny speck of the stripe is blurred to fix the shading? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:23, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Shrink the earpink a tad. 17:44, October 24, 2011 (UTC

Blur the haunch shading. 23:06, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Donezooo, and im not touching the earpink - 00:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Harespring(W) - Tweaked
More comin' from your truly, OA=Echomist and I added some shading - 23:04, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

I actually put this on the tweak list and didn't mean to. I meant HareFLIGHT. I changed it last night I think. *cough*Fail on my part, sorry*cough* XD But I think Harespring DID need his shading darkened so I guess this would still need to be tweaked. XD But anyays, lighten the shading ever so slightly so the white doesn't look so gray. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:53, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

How do you tweak these images and make them so wonderful? I personally, cannot. Blur the shading near the neck a little. 00:12, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Niceee. The shading makes the brown part on the back a bit gray, can you fix that? 14:53, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Possibly smooth out the earpink, it looks a little blotchy. 17:46, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. 23:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -pffft, I went ahead and tweaked without even knowing it wasnt even on the list XD - 00:09, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the earpink looks more solid. The earpink also needs to be moved a bit to the center of the ear. 22:27, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I cant do anything now cause I lost all the layers to it, and for the last time, Im not doing anything to the earpink or anything else besides the shading -.- So~Reuploaded - I found some miscolored lineart though, and i fixed that, but nothng else 22:58, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail (RC) (E) - Redone
I have permision now, don't worry :). Original artist was Bramble, shading needed tweaking and stripes needed to match the warriors :D . Comments?  Elorisa   19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the smudges :3 20:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I personally like the smudges. The make him look furry, which is brilliant to me. I think you should just enlarge the ear-pink a bit. 20:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like the smudges too, Shellheart. They're just a little sharp. 21:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say leave 'em as they are. They look good to me :3 23:55 Sun Oct 23

Reuploaded~better?  Elorisa   02:02, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the reddish parts on her haunch and her leg? 17:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the ear-pink curve round more at the top. 08:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I didn't see any reddish parts...:/  Elorisa   20:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights looks blotchy. 22:52, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Splashheart (W) - Redone
I figured since I did his leader, I should do his warrior as well. OA was Bramble, I redid it and changed the colour to match the leader's. 01:58, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. 02:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading/highlights. 02:03 Mon Oct 24

Re-uploaded. Done, but it's not showing ._. Just go to the file page if it doesn't show up. 02:19, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading or tone down the highlights. Move the tail highlight away from the base of the tail; it kinda looks like a stripe. Center the ear-pink, make it a tad smaller and brighten it. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:34, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:39, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and define the highlight on the tail. 22:59, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:35, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

If you're using highlights, brighten the one on the face, or dull the other ones to match. Enlarge the haunch highlight/thin out the haunch shading and blur all shading and/or highlights. 02:50 Tue Oct 25

Re-uploaded. 19:49, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink seems to fill the entire ear. Make it a bit smaller. 21:56, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading and the haunch highlight (just using the word highlight as a metaphor for the lighter areas). 17:17, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more towrds the center of the ear. 23:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (W) - Redone
Well... I tried... Redid her stripes to match Silverstream's. OA was me. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shoulder highlight bigger, blur the haunch highlight, and change the image size so it's only as big as the cat—no extra spaces on the outside. 03:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion, no highlights in this one, but I moved the shading. Forgive me if I'm sounding blunt, but I have no idea what you're talking about with the image size. I used the same sized blanks as everything else. Could you explain further? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 03:32, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

All right, I'm very OCD about this (I always was, don't worry), but look at Splashheart's warrior image. There is no extra space above his nose/ears, below his feet, or next to his tail. What I'm saying is just crop the image until the image size only extends as far as where the black ends. Does that make any sense to you? 03:38, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dull and enlarge the earpink. 04:21 Mon Oct 24

Better. Can you make the stripes a tad bdarker? Blpur the highlights. 20:05, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the muzzle and above the haunch. 21:20, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripes? Silverstream's stripes seem darker. 22:32, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Oblivion. Because I'm such a derp, I have no idea how to fix that. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 02:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really see the haunch highlight, can you brighten it a tad? (Sozzle if there ain't highlights.) Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 20:18, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, but you could resize the image using MS paint if you have windows. Perhaps lighten the shading on the face it seems a bit...er, flat...? And of course it looks amazing. ;P 00:47, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I checked the image size and it's exactly the same size as the warrior blanks. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Enlarge the earpink and define it. 22:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste 06:11 Fri Oct 28

Scourge (ki) - Tweaked
NOW I UNDERSTAND. Yes..sorry.. I dont know that.... then I putting it agin... sorry agin!!!! I really dont know Im allowen to have only 2 charart each.Leaf-storm,19:32,October 24,2011 (UTC)

Make the blurring on his white paw less blotchy, and please try and make an effort with spelling. In addition, try to avoid capitals and excessive exclamation marks. 21:40, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the left earpink, and write the OA and why it was tweaked. 22:53, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Mosswisker&Stealthfire is OA and reuploaded Leaf-storm,16:48,October 25,2011 (UTC)

And I tweaked it becuase he have the white paw on the wrong side Leaf-storm,16:50,October 25,2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 22:54, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) - Tweaked
I added a ripped ear and fixed some blurred lineart. OA was Sandy, tweaked by Bramble. 23:37, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the image. It's all scrunched up o3o. 23:41, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

It's because the changes aren't showing. Thicken the tear on the ear. It's too thin. 23:42, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:03, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I know this was only nominated for the lineart, but the shading really needs to be blurred. 02:52 Tue Oct 25

Shading looks prety fine to me - 03:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like it needs blurring to me. 03:47, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, the shading needs to be blurred. 08:09, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried, but keep in mind I don't have the original layering for this, so I'm working with everything on one layer. It's hard blurring without catching the lineart in the crossfire. 19:40, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks like it needs to be blurred to me, but I have a way you can keep from getting the lineart. You'd still have to be careful of the earpink, but if you want I can leave a message on your talk page so I don't cause clutter here? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:15, October 25, 2011 (UTC) Define shading and blur. 22:57, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Redone
Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? 20:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur her spots more. 20:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:58, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh how I love xcf. files >:3 22:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little too dark, or too yellow. Sky- Stop right there criminal  scum! 00:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I took all the colors from her leader image.... 00:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure you took them from the right spots of the image though. The spots look a little green... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  19:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail needs highlights. 22:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are not mandatory. 04:00, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think what you meant to say, Dapplecloud, was that the tail needs an area where there isn't any shading. Am I correct? 06:13 Fri Oct 28

Birchfall (W)- Tweaked
OA was SparrowWing, and Bracken and I tweaked it later on. The shading was blotchy, so I re-did that. :3 03:06, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe re-do the stripes? I'm not sure, they're just a...little...eh to me. 12:37, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, Icey. There's no need to tweak them. In fact, I've always been fond of this image. Since you're the last one to tweak it, can you please fix the ear pink? It looks too pointy. Blur it a bit, if you don't mind. 00:23, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but there's something odd about this image. I'm not sure, but maybe you could blur the shading a bit more? 20:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink and darken it. 23:01, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Halftail (Alt.W) - Tweaked
I just added a layer with Wildheart's beautiful lineart over it. Comments? 03:55, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and OA was Wildheart, and needed to match the others with patchy fur (since no one was opposed or asked me to delete the patchy fur). Changes are not showing.... 03:56, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

It seems like there's some miscolored lineart in a few places, could you fix that? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  18:02, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. 23:03, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:41, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (W) - Redone
Even though this is a total redo from his old warrior image, this is actually a tweak from his deputy image. I pasted the blank on top of it (along with fiddling around some) and viola, consistancy! OA not sure about, but we've got Echostar, Quailflightthecat and Ashshadow. There shouldn't be a whole lot that needs to be done, however, comments for improvement? 04:29, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The pale part of his belly needs to come to a point aimed at his shoulder. 04:34, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I looks like theres a piece of lineart missing on the back foot 22:26, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Applefur (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Believe it or not this is actually a tweak, since I did everything over the original image. Anyway, OA was Sandstar and the mottles needed to be redone. 10:15, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

It's so pretty~:3. Smudge the dapples a tad to give them a slight furry-esque look, like the warror image~  Elorisa   20:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and the mottles. 23:24, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) ~ Redone
I got permission from Iceheart to redo this. It needed to be more ginger colored and the shading needed to be smoothed out more, so that's what I did. I tried to match the previous pattern of stripes the best I could because I thought it looked nice. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Moonleaf to add stripes, I believe. Comments? 18:07, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Clear up the waste around him and redden the earpink a little. :3 19:49, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:53, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I kinda wanted to do this one, but oh well :). Darken the tail shading. 19:58, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading thinner, lighten and define it. 20:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, I like this! darken the shading on the tail Guradian22:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) - Redone
I do not want to hear ANY complaints. I was given permisson by Scarlet herself to re-do this. Look at my talk page. It was impossible fixing the stripes and darkening the mottles without killing the image. So I re-did it. No complaints. OA was Hiddensun, and I listed the reasons above. 22:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. *keeps mouth shut about redoing it* 22:11, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

-sigh- Okay, if your gonna redo this, then at least keep it the same style as the one before as before. I mean, that's the rules, right? Guradian 22:16, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

She had permission to redo it. But, she'll have to redo all of the others. Style doesn't matter. 22:17, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Don't sigh at me. I changed the style, but if you guys prefer me to change it back, I will, but yeah, like Cloudy said, itd oesn't matter. 22:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look very unnatural and stiff, especially on the tail. Elorisa  22:31, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dustpelt's stripes are unnatural. These look neat. 22:32, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Can the stripes on the tail at least be fixed? It goes from wavy ripples on the body to stiff straight stripes on the tail. Add a stripe or two to her head. Elorisa  22:34, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Great, now blur the stripes slightly. And add some to the hind paws - 22:36, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I'm NOT changing the style. I blurred the stripes, made the stripe wavy, and added a stripe to the head. I don't want to add strpes to her hind paws, she's stripeless there. XD 22:46, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Could you remove the stripes from the frost paws then? Then the back ones won't look so out of place. XD And could you dull the earpink a bit? This is BEAUTIFUL! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks so much :) 23:39, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Heathertail (W) - Tweaked
Dumb me. I uploaded it before I put this up, but here we go. I added shading. Comments?

22:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I kinda liked the old eye though :(. Anyways, move the earpink a little towards the ear. 22:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The old eye had no pupil. I can't move the ear pink, I don't have the ear pink layer. 22:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

You could still try though... 23:16, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

But I can't. 23:20, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Eye looks fine to me XD who cares if you changed it? Its not like you redid the whole image. Speaking of which, lighten the shading on the higher part of its back - 23:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: HER. xD 23:40, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Frostfur (E) - Tweaked
OA was Sandstar I believe. Shading needed to be thickened and blurred, so that's what I did. I also had to change the earpink, because, as I've stated before, I can't tweak the shading on images properly without redoing the earpink. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:42, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Please extend the haunch highlight further down more, and define/brighten the shoulder highlight a tad - 22:46, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 23:08, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Don't know what you mean about the haunch one, but I fixed the shoulder. And Dapplecloud, they're blurred to the max. (the shading, I don't have highlights on this one) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:09, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Larksong (E) - Tweaked
The charat needed lighter shading and OA was Echomist. 23:06, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsetail (P3) (W) - Tweaked
Please don't tell me to change the eye, it's fine how it is. Original artist was Flamingomom3/Hawktalon, and it needed to have shading and the patches needed to be blended better (I didn't really understand what 'blended' meant, so I just blurred them). 23:15, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, define the patches, you can barely tell they're there anymore, and how is the eye fine? It looks like it doesn't have a pupil. It should be fixed. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:23, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Did you fix the eyes? It doesn't look like it. And could you make the white whiter? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  23:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. 23:27, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Whats up with people wanting the eye fixed? It not a major thing. I think its perfectly fine, and darken the shading on the right ear 23:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just hope people don't fight over it, though. ;_; 23:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, I can't see it., Please change it. 23:33, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

There are tons of different eye styles; does it really matter? Elorisa  23:45, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

It does if you can't see the pupil. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  00:41, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I remember going through this discussion when my Leafstorm was approved...xD. Someone (I think it was Oblivion or someone who was a lead back then...xD) said it doesn't matter what eye style you use; it's the artist's choice. Elorisa  01:27, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's a pupil. Get over it, guys. Every artist has their own style and way of doing things. The eye is fine how it is. 01:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (TC) (W) - Tweaked
That was the fastest I've ever had an image approved. o.o Anyways, OA was Mousetalon, and the shading needed to be fixed. I also fixed the eyelash so he was a boy. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:15, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, how many times am I gonna forget the heading? -.- ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:17, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:18, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (K) ~ Redone
OA was Nightpelt101, and I redid it to match her warrior version. Seriously, it needed different colors, pelt design, patches, etc. Her warrior version was redone, so this shouldn't be declined. 23:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

This is good, but wasn't Wildheart supposed to do this? 02:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

...yep. I was... 06:18 Fri Oct 28

Whitethroat (W) ~ Redone
OA was probably Sandy..then tweaked by Nightshine and Mousetalon. I sat here for an hour trying to fix the other image, and it was impossible. Changes might not be showing... 00:08, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (Q) ~ Tweaked
Converted to shorthair using layers, I didn't want to mess with this pretty image. OA is Nightshine. Comments? 03:45, October 28, 2011 (UTC)