Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Runningstorm (W) - Redone
The kit's coming up in a bit. So here. OA was me, and it was redone to look more natural. 02:42, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad, and  if that's a pale belly, can you blur and define it? 02:49, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

Saturate the brown; I thought he was a black tabby at first. 03:06, January 4, 2013 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Dumb me forgot to save the xcf, so I redid him completely. 02:41, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten and saturate it more, still doesn't look like a brown tabby. 19:04, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Percy (R) - Tweaked
Tis Hickory <3 I'm the OA. Needed rumpled fur. I'm contemplating lightening the shading a smidge but I'm not going to unless I get the ok since it wasn't nominated for that. I was also thinking about giving him fenderskirts (more fur on the belly) but I don't know. 01:53, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Make a bit of the rumpled fur go outside the blank, not just all inside it. 19:05, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe lighten the shading a touch, because I can't see very much  of the ruffled fur 21:30, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh ja, I get to do this 8D 04:12, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Around the curve of the tail, the lineart look a little boxy 04:23, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Runningstorm (Ki) - Redone
Redone to be more natural. OA was me with a tweak by Dazzle. 02:53, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

For some reason the file isn't in the history, nor will it overwrite o.o 03:24, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

-pokes comment on warrior- That applies here too, and also define the shading. 19:04, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

Harveymoon (W) ~ Tweaked
Redid the shading. Do not ask me to change the collar, because I'm not.

Except where the collar rests in the back looks really awkward and should probably be moved down a few pixels. Also, expand the shading on the shoulder and define it on the haunch. 17:33, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

I was talking about the color, not the physical lineart. xD I don't quite get why I should change it, though. It's been like that for a while, and I took the lineart from another image. I'll go see what I can do.

Waste by the ear. 18:32, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't touch the collar, because I spent like...an hour trying to play around and move it and it didn't work. .-.

Larchkit (Ki) ~ Redone
Ohlook. OA was me. Redone for issues and not being able to see the stripes.

Can you add a bit more depth to the shading? 23:16, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. Beautiful! 02:43, January 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't smudge it too much, because you're not going to be able to see it otherwise.

Mapleshade (Alt. Q) - Tweaked
OA was me. Redid the shading and tweaked the stripes a bit. Comments? 02:34, January 8, 2013 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ro) - Tweaked
Added patchy fur. Last OA be Loonie 03:53, January 8, 2013 (UTC)

Hawkheart (MC Alt2) ~ Redone
idk if he's flecked but hey. OA was Starry and redone because of reasons. 05:03 Tue Jan 8

Can you possibly make the brown a little less red? It kinda looks like he's caked in blood xD not that that's a bad thing... :3  05:07, 08, 01, 2013

Re-uploaded colour looks so icky ;.;   05:32 Tue Jan 8