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Rootpaw (App)- Withdrawn
Here he is! Comments? First time trying texture. I freaking love him and his parents. Also, will remove that waste in a moment. 01:41, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:46, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, define the eye depth and add some shine to them as well. The shading appears to be leaking from the shading and on the chest next to the leg line art. Lighten the earpink too, it looks super dark. It also looks like there's some waste by the head. 02:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll fix all these things tomorrow! Ah, I was suspicious something was bugging me. 02:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded will fix more stuffs tomorrow 02:23, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Also, if your light is coming from the front, there some be some light on the fronts of the forelegs and the chest 02:25, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Leaking shading by the belly and haunch, waste by the tail tip and shoulder/neck Malina457 (talk) 03:02, April 11, 2019 (UTC)malina

Try connecting the body texture to the hindleg texture. Right now the Hindleg texture just weirdly cuts off. (Something like this, excuse my sloppiness -> ) Tinystream (talk) 03:30, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

vary the texture slightly more so that it doesnt look as paintbrushy. i suggest using a smudge tool and running it in the direction of fur/drawing more texture lines. in addition, her color looks unrealistically saturated and slightly green. i suggest googling light ginger cats and color picking for a realistic base color 04:29, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw should have shorthair lineart b/c it never said he had long fur--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:07, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

fur length is artist's choice when unstated. 09:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC) Understood--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked off Tree's MCA. Why does that look unrealistic? Malina, can you circle where? 13:05, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

IMO the image looks slightly green. Might be because of the texture/shading, but it could stand to be tweaked


 * I think it also has something to do with the black/blue based shading on top of yellow. I know shading tint is artist's choice but I think you'll have less problems if you used a darker orange or even red on top of yellow 16:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll try to address all of your comments! I learned from reading an archive that red is a good shade for yellow cats (Gooseberry's queen I think). I'll reupload later. Also yep fur length is my choice, I made him to resemble his "weird" father. 22:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:39, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

There’s some waste by the tail and ears! On the edges of the image/canvas. -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:53, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Around the ENTIRE tail. (my bold isnt working, sorry) Malina457 (talk) 00:14, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina

this is turning out better. you need to define the shading everywhere, and also smooth it out on the tail and the belly. it appears that the shading is leaking in some places, which is probably a result of abusing the blur tool. in this case i still highly recommend the smudge tool at 10-20 px to achieve the same effect as the blur tool, but better without the risk of having the shading leaking 00:28, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:25, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading on the backleg furthest from us --

03:36, 4/12/2019

Seems like the shading is leaking on the chest, legs and tail. also can you smooth out the shading on the legs and tail? the texture also needs to follow the fur flow. what you have here looks like it's crisscrossing

Reuploaded redid shading with a lot of smoothing out, will reup for waste in a momento 22:49, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste has been killed via lasso 22:57, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can u define shading on the left side of it's face? Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:31, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any shading with my source there, I think. I'll check my reference image to see if I need to place some there though. 23:50, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading everywhere/define the gradient. 01:11, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded also darkened the shading a bit. 01:40, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

it still needs smoothing out

Reuploaded oh StarClan halp the shading is icky now 02:39, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

not sure if you removed the texture but i can't really see it on my screen? also sorry to be a pain  perhaps the shading could be blurred/smudged/smoothed out more

I did remove the texture- I was struggling with it. I'll blur (and possibly redo) the shading again tomorrow. 05:17, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste will be gone in a jiffy 14:19, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:22, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, define the depth on the chest, and smooth it out slightly on the haunch 01:54, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reuploaded will remove waste later. 14:20, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:43, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

The edges of the shading should be smoothed and can youd define the texture? You said there was texture but I'm not seeing any at all?  Ellie  life is an illusion 16:25, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I said I removed it- look under Moonyy's comment. 16:29, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix that haunch shading. 16:41, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ahh much better *pats Rootpaw* 16:46, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and leg shading. ​​​​

Reuploaded  18:19, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing where the shading has been smoothed out. Could you try smoothing the edges?  Ellie  life is an illusion 15:57, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:05, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light on that front leg (the upper part) and smooth out the shading there

With the approval of Moss, you've been upgraded to an apprentice and this can now say "for approval" ^^ 13:22, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Shading seems to be leaking on the hind leg closest to us, and the front paw furthest away from us. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:45, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a bit on the shoulder, tail, and front paw farthest from us? Dunno if it's just me, but the shading on the front of the body looks darker than the rest. could you either darken the rest of the shading to match that or lighten that area a little? Define the shading in the ears. 15:34, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Also needs blue eyes. 16:19, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Vec! I'll reup later. 22:14, April 16, 2019 (UTC) Wikia will not let me upload him, it doesn't say under the bottom of the file history "Upload a new version of this file". For now, look here for changes. 22:50, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded at last. 22:51, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth

Reuploaded looks like he's in a sunset now. 00:54, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste next to the left ear, the left leg, and in between the hind legs JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:28, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

About depth: you seem to be just darkening the shading in general. the image could still use a thinner, darker layer of shading

Define the eye depth and add some light on the chest

Reuploaded 3 times aghhh Spooky you just said that when I was defining the depth XD. Can you circle where? Will define the eye depth now. 21:48, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded let's hope I didn't kill his eyes with the burn tool. 21:53, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

The source you seem to be aiming for resembles this; so to where that has light.

Reuploaded  02:24, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

define the light on the legs

Reuploaded  15:18, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

There's still waste floating around, and smooth the shading on the < front leg and chest. The earpink appears rather sharp as well, and I'd recommend checking shading leaking away from the lineart, which is most places.

Reuploaded I'll never get the shading to look right  23:26, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Hi, my name is Potato and I love Rootpaw, Violetshine, and others. I also think shading personally dislikes me and Gaussian Blur is awesome. 00:00, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading on the haunch and define it on the back paws

Reuploaded how is this, Fox? 23:25, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the front half of the body doesn't appear to match the back in depth. 15:02, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

That's weird.. my depth is on the same opacity. I'll redo the depth (I didn't like it anyway) and reup soon. 22:15, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded this shading is being fussy.. 22:33, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail and smooth out the shading on the haunch

Withdrawn gonna go attempt a tabby, plus this shading has annoyed me for way too long. 03:07, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Plumstone (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

For some reason wikia isn't showing jt but from the discord inage, her design should match File:Plumstone.apprentice.png also be sure to not thumb images as it messes with the format.  Ellie  life is an illusion 05:31, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and dull the ear/nosepink, as it looks rather neon. 06:23, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does it look now? 00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

She has to match her apprentice. The body is facing a different direction granted, but the Head still the same direction and some of the side the Apprentice shows is visible. You must match her colors to that as they do not match up right now, and match basic patch placement, and smoothness. Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 11:37, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, smudge the patches, and smooth out the shading. 22:03, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I used #dd983d for the patches mixed with #844711, and black with a low opacity. #553c33 for the earpink. Eyes should be amber, base for that is #dca864 I think. The black base is just pure black. The patches need to be rougher and thinner. Nose color is #1e1616. 01:03, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the colours, Patch. I redid the whole thing.

Expand, define, and smooth out the shading. For the shading use a dark tint, like blue or red. Then run the blur tool or smudge tool over it to make it look pretty. You can also go to Filters>Blur>Gaussian Blur, the best way to get the shading looking smooth. Smudge the patches a lot more in the direction of the fur as well. 21:42, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll blur the shading and I'll define the ear depth and eye depth.

Reuploaded. What about now?

Better. However, please expand the shading more, and define it. Her patches are lighter, sharper, and smaller. 22:12, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Some more patches should be added as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:34, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

You've still got time, but are you still working? 17:39, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Thriftpaw (A) - Declined
Didn't know what her eye color was, so I just guessed. Hope that's ok? --Pondleaf (talk) 12:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try, but first of all your heading is actually incorrect as it needs either for approval or for Evaluation. I can't find you on the projects table so idk if this should be approval or evaluation but if needed someone can fix it. Second, your file names incorrect, we've got a file naming format! It should be File:Thriftpaw.apprentice.png rather than what you have. Also, could you define all the shading? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:35, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I've also added you to the reservation table. Make sure to claim the image you want and date it before posting another artwork to the approval page! 13:00, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 13:02, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

You need to match her kit, i still have the file if you need it. 13:43, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Okay, can I have the file then? --Pondleaf (talk) 07:02, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, do you have an email or discord I can send it to? 21:11, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

no rush, but are you still working? 01:34, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work; post-10 days.

Cloud (Storm) (Alt. E)- For Approval
Comments? I might need to smooth out the shading, I'll do that tomorrow. 02:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

there's a bit of waste behind the head

next to the ear too actually. also there appears to be shading leaking around the haunch/underbelly area.

The shading should be smoothed too and it wouldn't hurt tk add a tad more depth. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

define light more on the front paws please. --

06:39, 4/17/2019

Reuploaded  23:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the front leg. smooth out the shading on the haunch and add depth everywhere

can you also define the shading on the ear? <span style="">02:40 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded  21:42, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

smudge the pelt into the earpink and the shading is still really blotchy. Also, most of the shading suggests that the light is coming from over the back, but the face and the placement of the light in the eye suggests that it's coming from the front 06:03, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste next to the ear

Reuploaded tried with the shading depth, how does this look? 21:38, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, rump and the space between the belly and tail I think. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded should be gone now! 02:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading --

16:02, 4/20/2019

Reuploaded how is dis, Silver? 17:02, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste by the tail, legs and head! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  01:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste-free! 02:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed. 03:19, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded how's this? 03:37, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Can you expand it on the legs and flank, and define it on the face? 13:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded twice also defined the tail's light. There is already shading on the face, it's below the ear closest to us. 15:32, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The shading needs to be smoothed more, pretty much everywhere, save for the head. There appears to be shading leaking on the tail, belly, and limbs. Can you also define the shading on the one paw furthest from us and inside the ear?

I'll work on this soon. Who said that, btw? 22:55, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Patch said it, the power of history logs! 00:33, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

There's waste around the head, and smooth the shading you erased on the tail and front paws? Every time you erase shading, you're gonna want to smooth it out. ^^ 12:50, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded green shading is sometimes no but today is yes 23:14, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Frondwhisker (W) - For Approval
Shading looks horrendous but I guess we'll see. The colors are taken from the apprentice.

19:42, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the back foot. Also smooth out the shading a little? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:33, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. 22:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:31, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice stripes seem thicker, could you thicken them? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:35, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:45, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the facial shading some? <span style="">02:42 Thu Apr 18

Reuploaded

03:12, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the pale parts rougher and make the pale marks over her eyes more pointy? Her tail also needs some pale. She needs some more stripes on the leg closest to us and on her chest, to match what i had on the kit. Could you maybe make the texture rougher too? it looks a bit too soft (i used the pencil tool to make it) the stripes on the face could be rougher too. the stripes on the forehead are also more like a half circle on the bottom, then two other halves of a circle on the edges. I have no idea if that makes sense so if you need me to explain further or a redline for that let me know. 03:50, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Could you? It'd be easier for me that way.

03:59, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

sort of like half a circle with an "M" she also needs three little dots below her eyes. here's her kit with just the stripes, as a reference for her leg and face stripes, if that helps. 04:15, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

23:34, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The texture is very pencil-ey and hard edged. Could you soften it?

Reuploaded

21:15, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shading on the hind leg? And I think the black on her nose should be expanded to touch the lines of her nose if I'm not mistaken. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  12:41, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

00:38, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the haunch to curve along the back, and shade the little triangle/back leg, as it'd more than likely be in shadow.

Better?

20:19, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Not sure if this is needed but could you make the texture a bit more subtle? Just reduce the opacity by a tad. 15:51, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

The texture currently matches the kit & apprentice, not sure if it needs to be changed in that regard.

18:19, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Troutclaw (E) - CBA
I wanted a challenge! .. and anime hair. im only in it for thE HAIR. I referenced and colorpicked the star. i dont think i matched the stripes very great tho?? but if you have suggesstions on that please do ill probably fiddle with those tomorrow. i sure got that challenge. i think i can have this and flutterkit bc this is a redo? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 02:07, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

This looks very good! The stripes appear a tad sharper/rugged on the star. Maybe try using a very small eraser and stroke horizontally on the edges? 12:17, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 12:39, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, will re-up soon as I can. I've finally almost got the stripes to a point I like them more. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:52, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

reups i think this should match a bit nicer if I did it right. also sorry for delay next reups will be faster <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:41, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Dawncloud (E) ~ For Approval
redid this, because I could not make heads or tails of how to even begin tweaking it

CBA?

Sorry to break CBA, could you actually expand the shading on the haunch? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:06, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm gonna reupload this later but will do.

Just gonna nudge to see if you're still working, Star?

unfortunately I am busy and will not be back at my computer until Saturday. sorry.

Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif">Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Bright Young Things,serif">Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded<span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Reuploaded. I like the eye color of the apprentice pic more oof :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  13:19, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

What are the lighter blotches on her? Are those highlights? If so, tone them down (on the opacity bar). Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The pupils appear to be inconsistent in color- one eye has a darker black than the other. Shading is still leaking in some places. Don't worry! I struggle with that as well. Fill those blank areas with shading- I can provide a redline if you want. Smooth out the shading everywhere- just smooth out the edges with the blur or smudge tool, Gaussian Blur makes shading leak away, only use it if you want a really good shading gradient. You have unfilled pixels on > this side of the tail. Sorry for the wall of text! You're doing good so far! 22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Potato! <3 And thank you so much for the redline if you can provide!!! I feel so foolish… <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Here. Red= fill in/add shading. Blue= Remove shading to fit your light source. Green=Waste. Delete that. Yellow= missing/light pixels. Magenta= blur/smudge and tone down the highlights. Hope this helps! (if I mess up on the source sorry if I do). 22:31, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Aww thank you Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  03:40, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm it doesn't appear you did what I said. Did you reupload the right file? The only difference I see is that the highlight blotches are set to a higher opacity.. I meant to lower them, then blur/smudge. If you need any more help, let me know! 03:51, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof... maybe it's the .mpd file, I guess? :P Anyway :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

What is that on her belly? If that's shading depth you need to lighten it and blur/smudge it. Lighten the highlight spots on her legs more and then blur/smudge them. Smooth out the shading and make >> this pupil darker to match <<this pupil. Let me know if you need to elaborate! 13:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Havenpelt (Q) - CBA
Honestly I'm not really happy with this. Tinystream (talk) 23:05, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing the image? Could reup it? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:47, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Darken shading and define the light <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:48, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reup I may have to redo the white. Tinystream (talk) 01:28, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the light on the forepaws, they're looking quite grey at the moment

Judging by her apprentice, the eyes need to be a darker green. These look pale teal tbh. 02:44, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Her eyes are green? I though they were blue... Either way, I'm not sure if I can change it since I colorpicked it from the apprentice.. Tinystream (talk) 21:02, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like the apprentice to me imo Malina457 (talk) 00:56, April 23, 2019 (UTC)malina

Eyes look fine and sometimes Wikia washes out blue/green colours. 11:42 Tue Apr 23 2019

Could you smooth out the transitions between the white and black? And add some, faint, shading to the front paws. There at least be some. 12:48, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you make the white on the belly white? I can't even see it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:06, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reup There was already shading on the front paws so I just defined it, also made some other shading fixes. I'm also not sure how to fix the belly white, since it's below both shading layers? Tinystream (talk) 22:50, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Oh and also, I won't be here for the weekend. Tinystream (talk) 22:57, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Rain (Alt.E) ~ CBA
I have no idea of the light source so if I need to fix it, please be specific of where exactly to adjust/add shading.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:25, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

With this source, there shouldn't be any shading on the back. See Cloud (my art). She has a similar source to this. 02:12, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Actually from the way it seems, there shohld be back shading as it looks as though its coming from the --> <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:09, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Yes it's meant to be coming from top -> so I think a little bit of back shading is needed.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  05:26, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

I'd still recede it some on the back. Some is needed, but I don't think that much is. Also, shading appears to be leaking away from the lineart on the belly and the front legs could use light definition

Reupload<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  04:20, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you maybe add some more shading on the shoulder? <--- portion of it. 12:46, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reupload<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:35, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Fringewhisker (W) - CBA
so. tortoiseshells. 20:45, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Uh from what her page says she's spose to be white with brown spltoches? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:57, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

It matches the apprentice Mink, except for the face patch, please recede it to the mid nose, its white there, good job though! Malina457 (talk) 21:16, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

On the loner and apprentice the pattern is much less smudged than what you have. 21:34, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

The face placement actually looks alright in my opinion, but maybe move the white on the cheek up a little bit? Sorry if this is a repeat comment 21:52 Sun Apr 21 2019

Ok maybe I was seeing an old version?? Cause now it looks fine, my apologies XD Malina457 (talk) 22:06, April 21, 2019 (UTC)malina

Re-Uploaded! I've been trying for a bit now but if it still doesn't match, I'll work on it tommorow! 22:51, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

could you define the body shading just a tad? so cute!! <span style="">01:04 Mon Apr 22

There are three shades on brown on the image. You've got two of them that's darker and lighter, and another that's more grayish. There's supposed to be some white flecks on ---> portion of the face. I don't know if Jayce already offered you, but would you like one of the files? I did her kit a while back, and trust me, it really helped. ^^ 03:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I honestly have not had the time to offer the file, but I'm always willing to send one to someone if they need it. (provided I remember to do so lmao) ​​​

Re-Uploaded! I think this is better? If it's not the file might be helpful ;w;  19:24, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure on this, but does this have texture, or is that textured shading? Also, there should be white "flecks" scattered throughout the pelt. ​

Re-Uploaded! And it's textured shading with a tiny bit of texture 12:45, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Please remove the texture, as the other images don't have it. While texture is always artist's choice, if the other images in the set don't have it, you aren't allowed to add it to whichever image you're doing. ​​​​​​

Re-Uploaded! I got rid of my texture layer, but if the shading is too much, I can smooth it out! 18:58, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some more white to ---> front paw? The brown is supposed to be only covering the right side of it. 12:44, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 01:47, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA ? `

Conefoot (W) ~ For Approval
Color picked from the apprentice! -Shadow  hOnK :o)  17:06, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

The patches need to be sharper, per the apprentice image. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:07, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm just from the files, since the earpink is darker because of shading coverage on the app; the color should be #i875e5d beneath everything, which should be just a touch lighter than this. Also, I believe there's some shading leaking away from the lineart on both back feet.

Can you smooth out the shading on the flank/side? There looks to be a sharp line through it. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  21:34, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

could you also smooth out the tail shading a bit? <span style="">19:42 Tue Apr 23

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  21:32, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

You have waste outside the tail and < these whiskers. 22:12, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Apprentice does have a little gray on the top of the head, and the gray on the back should go lower to have only just the belly as white. The gray additionally doesn't stretch all the way up the neck, leading to the head - it should cut off before the shoulderblade.

Reuploaded! Like that? -Shadow  hOnK :o)  00:00, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the gray- it's really hard-edged and does not match the apprentice (was this rude? sorry if it was). 00:02, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! -Shadow   hOnK :o)  00:18, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Mmkay.. the gray is beginning to turn a tad yellow. Can you fix that? Also, I think you oversmudged the gray tad, so perhaps sharpen the edges of it? Sorry for being so nitpicky.. ;) 00:32, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

I also feel like the gray is overblurred. 12:30, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! This is the bane of my existence -Shadow   hOnK :o)  01:35, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

The gray on the face is a little overblurred still.

Per previous comment, the gray should not stretch all the way to the neck, and it still does.

Actually, all of the gray seems lighter in shade and overblurred, not just the face. 22:04, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Shellheart (E) - CBA
I made the pattern closer to the StarClan, it didn't really match well before. <span style="">00:24 Tue Apr 23

It looks lovely! Could you smoothen out the shading on the face and left of the shoulder? 22:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded The markings make the face shading look sharper than it actually is ^.^; but I got it to look a little softer <span style="">16:16 Thu Apr 25

Small thing, but the shading's leaking away from the lineart just slightly on the chest, next to that fur tuft that is the arm.

Reuploaded Also fixed some leaking in other spots <span style="">18:39 Fri Apr 26

CBA?

Baykit (Ki) ~ For Approval
okay, my son is done. im probably gonna have to either darken or light the face/booty shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:39, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Hm, this looks more ginger then golden imo. maybe make the base a bit more yellow. and smooth the shading on the hind leg and tail.

10:30, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you expand then lighten the shading everywhere? 11:21, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

I think its fine the colors that is, as I used Star Flower's colors as an example (color picked from her and all) and she's a golden tabby. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:38, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

I have to agree with Ari, I wonder if it's the shading that's doing it... She seems a bit more orange than golden. Also, smooth out the shading everywhere, lighten it a bit on the neck, and don't forget to expand it on the tail. ​​

Hm.. I'll fiddle with it and see if I can fix that then. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:47, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, Max helped with a redline and I used an image as well for the new stripes. I tried to fix the back stripes but they still seemed to straight or something. I expanded the tail shading and smoothed all the shading. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:48, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Can you.. um.. make the stripes less blocky? Or make them look more like stripes? I can't tell where they even are on Baykit's pelt, if they're the darker or lighter part of the pelt. 22:02, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Those do look like stripes, its a classic tabby design. I used a life image and a friend's redline for it, I don't see where the base part and stripes can be confused imo. Stripes are always normally the darker ones unless your seeing a smoke tabby. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:44, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

i think it looks fine– it looks like a marbled tabby 23:15, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the hutch shading a bit more? I can't quite tell the difference between the dark marbling and the shading, but could just be my screen! 03:11, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Curlfeather (Q) - For Approval
Couldn't find any other chararts on her page so did whatever. 01:36, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

warrior and kit are here, please match them. Since I'm still around and the OA of the warrior, I'd like to keep the set the style it currently has. ​​​

Reuploaded - Fixed everything. Copied every colour and every layer percentage of the warrior. Hopefully this looks good! 03:11, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading and add depth to it as well <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:00, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you make the texture on the main body curve more along the flank so that it doesnt look as flat? 11:21, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define your light source, the face and tail suggest -> whilst the body looks other wise. Removing the shading from the back would probably fix the issue 11:38 Tue Apr 23 2019

Can you define the pupils? -- 22:43, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to keep as close as possible to the OA's, but put in the changes requested. 23:20, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

could you make it so that the texture flows naturally on the main body? criss crossing looks unnatural and doesn't match the other images

Reuploaded - Realised the mistake. I forgot to change the secondary texture. 23:30, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:45, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think the facial and stomach shading could be smooth and lightened a tad. Compared to the rest its overly dark and doesn't look consistent with the rest. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:51, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  03:08, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Its still pretty dark, the tail and legs seem way lighter. You might work with darkening those bits as I know it can be hard lightening up some areas. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:53, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  11:36, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Patchpelt (E) ~ CBA
13:17, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

on the star the black seems more smudged

The warrior and previous elder were done before the StarClan, and they don't seem as smudged as the StarClan image. I think it's good as-is.

CBA?

Feather of Flying Hawk (Ki) - CBA
I now regret giving them texture and I plan to mess with the shading but... here's my nb child. All colors from the to-be. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:58, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Minor changes. Juniperbriar (talk) 18:23, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Might you define the shading on the tail? ​​​​

Maybe define the shading behind the shoulder? 12:33, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Going to mess with the shading more. It looked fine in SAI but it looks blotchy here. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:27, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate this slightly less now. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Lean tabby with torn ear (W) - CBA
Tried some new things. Going to mess with the shading. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:05, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:06, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

I bet this was meant to be like... a mistake for Boulder or something lmao. Anyways, could you define the shading in <- ear? Super minor, I know, I apologize. ​

Reuploaded It's alright, I was planning to do it anyway lol - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  19:44, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 21:49, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Pine That Clings to Rock (CG) - CBA
Kit's mine, so I changed the colors and gave him his father's eyes.

Needs mud on the fur maybe? Tybaxel (talk) 16:47, April 24, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Yeah, that I know. I'll add it once I get this shading down; I'm not good with larger blanks and I want to make sure I get that down before I add mud.

Might I suggest curving the haunch shading a tad more, and having the paws completely in shadow? Then I think you’d be all good to add the mud :D 17:22 Wed Apr 24 2019

Re-uploaded.

CBa?

Spotfur (W) - CBA


i’m assuming i can post this now? i’m very sorry about posting it before, i misinterpreted the rules 😓

Can I just say, I love this lol. Maybe smooth out the haunch shading? Malina457 (talk) 00:29, April 25, 2019 (UTC)malina

Can you either define the light or define shading? It all lokks a bit flat throughout for me but it could be my phone screen. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:09, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded the shadows are fine to me i think, theyre on 80% opacity.

I agree that the shading depth could be defined. 14:03, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i've tried to define it as much as i can, shadows are on 90% opacity   18:41, April 26, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA?

Harelight (W) ~ For Approval
my boy. all colors picked from apprentice

08:39, April 25, 2019

Can you smooth the tail shading? It looks like its going against the natural tail form on the top and it throws it off <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:41, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

maybe try expanding the fur texture over the haunch? it looks a bit blank, otherwise it’s super cute! 02:24, April 26, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

maybe smooth the lower haunch shading? Malina457 (talk) 03:38, April 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

There should also be a bit of shading curvingnover the top of the haunch. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:47, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups

11:08, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to repeat earlier comments, but can you please extend the texture more on the tail and hutch maybe? Looks like it's just the white of the blank and not finished. 03:15, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

the apprentice follows like this. --

OST-2.warrior-1 - For Approval
Made from a practice charart I did. So his torn ear will be removed shortly. Just wanted to post it. And I accidently named it wrong, it should be OST not OTS <span style="">16:24 Thu Apr 25

Renamed for ya^^

Reuploaded Thank ya! His torn ear is gone, since I don't know if I can add stuff like that to these lol <span style="">15:22 Fri Apr 26

Could you define the shading on the > ear a little?

Rabbitfur (E) -For Approval
tried to at least resemble beebs' style but this is a stark reminder of why i don't do classic tabbies 06:44, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you reduce the white on the chest and muzzle? 14:01, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 15:57, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Rushtail (E) ~ For Approval
so he has a star, but his page doesn't even say he dies? so i'm not sure if i had to match the star or if i could revamp it as much as i did (oops) but i'll change it to whatever it's supposed to be

My only issue thus far is he looks a tad green, maybe try adjusting the color a tad? Malina457 (talk) 12:05, April 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

The star isn't in use, Su cites are not canon. He doesn't look green. Can you smooth out the shading? 13:00, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

sorry for my lack of knowledge but what are su cites? i’ll fix up the shading when i wake up :)

well he looks greenish to me :/ Malina457 (talk) 21:45, April 26, 2019 (UTC)malina

Eheh Su is kinda a long story.. she was making canon sites and one day Vicky said she wasn't canon. Anyways can you also define the light on the tail? 22:33, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

It does look rather green... and also, the shading on the front leg closest to us should reach further up, to define the leg/shoulder shape

reups i changed the base colour so i hope it looks less green, also blurred the shading but i might mess around with it more since i'm not that happy with it :/

Cloudy Sun (E) - For Approval
Ancient isn't in use, nor is the sharpclaw. The Ancient should have never been in use; they didn't just stop being elders when they moved to their new territories.

Could you darken the shading everywhere but the tail?

She looks a bit golden to me

Snow (CG) ~ For Approval
16:14, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Petalfall (Elder) - For Approval
Kept most of the original pattern by Mount Everest, just updated the linework. 18:52, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some shading to the ---> ear and the front legs/paws? 19:57, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Added shading to the paws and tweaked the ears. 21:01, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some shading to >> this side of the tail? It looks kinda flat over there. Sorry if your source doesn't call for shading to be there ;) 22:45, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Yeah, there should definitely have been some shading there. 10:43, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Dapplenose (E) ~ For Approval
Dunno if I did the pattern justice. 19:53, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Mottled dark gray and brown warrior (W) ~ For Approval
Forgot the mottles whoops. Also, dunno if this is can be considered dark gray and brown enough. Tried to find a hue that matched both. And, I also don't know if I should remove the stripes on the body, since he was only described with a tabby head. So many questions 19:53, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light/depth. It seems flat on my phone screen <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:55, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Could you also define the gray and mottles. I can't see mottles and the gray looks more pale brown <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:52, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Tabby part only needs to apply to his head, I think. 22:42, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups 00:04, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Gravelnose (W) - For Approval
What the heck, all these new cats have awesome names  21:20, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Can you make the texture on the tail flow in one direction a little more? It looks kind of criss-crossy. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:46, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Dark Gray-and-Brown Warrior (W) ~ For Approval
Mostly just an excuse to reuse Deerfoot's pattern. Comments? 23:01, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the tip of the shoulder patch into the gray more? If you're confused I can provide a redline. 23:10, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I understood what you meant. 23:21, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth and smooth the edges of it? Could you also add light to the chest. Even with this skurce there would still be light on the chest and legs <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:23, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Quick Water (Star) ~ For Approval


Can you define the depth? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:24, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

BP gray kit ~ For Approval


Can you define the shading <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:23, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Deerleap (E) ~ For Approval
matched the star Define the shading on the gray. 13:11, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hollyflower (E) ~ For Approval
mega hollyflower 09:54, April 27, 2019 (UTC)