Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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Floss (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA be a one DJAngelCandy, tweaked to make her gray paler. Comments? Bb un   legs  16:15, May 27, 2013 (UTC)

Dunno whether you could do something with the white to make it look less grey could ya? 10:18 Tue May 28

I think it's fine, but hey, if someone disagrees, I'll go try to find a way ^^;;. Bb un   legs  21:11, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Although parts of it are fine, I think some areas like her stomach, back leg, neck, and tail could be brightened up. 21:17, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Give a bit more variation to the shading on her left hind leg 22:24, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  22:44, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

The gray should be paler, imho. Perhaps not as pale as Cloudstar, but this still looks like a neutral gray.

Re-up. How's this? Bb un   legs  22:54, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

The white is still really gray.

Re-up. Also defined the belly shading a bit, as it was starting to creep away from the lineart. Bb un   legs  19:49, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight on the white 02:04, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Also defined the shading a bit - it was looking a tad flat. Bb un   legs  20:40, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Define does not mean darken. When you "defined" it, you also made it extremely gray. ._.

Re-up. Bb un   legs  20:45, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Could you lighten this more to match the kittypet? 14:38, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bb  un   legs  15:07, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Floss (KP) ~ Tweaked
Just ran over the grey layer with a dodge tool. OA is myself. 10:09 Tue May 28

Same as the loner, I think the gray should be paler.

There's also waste on our left next to his head. 12:48 Wed May 29 2013

There seems to be a bit of shading on the belly that looks like a patch of darker color. Could you blur it a bit? 03:54, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:15 Fri May 31

Sunstar (Star) - Tweaked
OA was myself, tweaked stripes to match better and shading to be less flat. I redid stripes and shading in order to do these things, and I swear he is not redone. Please don't shoot me... 21:53, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Could you perhaps tone down his ginger a bit to match his other image, and blur the stripes a tad more? If not, cool with me. Bb un   legs  21:55, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Thin and sharpen the stripes a bit more 22:26, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Played with the ginger color a bit, and then thinned out the stripes and added a couple more in to match better. Not sure whether to blur them or sharpen, but I think thinning out the stripes sharpened them up a bit. 18:34, May 29, 2013 (UTC)

Try lightening the stripes, to see if they match better. Also, blur the paw(our right), chest, and haunch/belly thing shading a tad to make it blend more. Could you also define it(shading) a bit more? It looks a bit flat. 03:52, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Busy couple of days. Did just that. ^^ 00:23, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Saturate his color to match the othe images more. 14:35, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Piketooth (W) ~ Redone


Here's Piketooth, he needed a more realistic pattern, and shading didn't make sense. OA was me, tweaked by Wild and Stoner, I think. I feel redeemed. Changes may or may not be showing. I think shading might need to be defined, so aside from the shading, comments? Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 22:03, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading tons and blur the earpink. 22:04, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge his pale underbelly a bit? Bb un   legs  22:12, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 21:57, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more.

Reuploaded. I tried tinting it a bit more, see if that made it more noticeable. Ca na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 00:24, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define exactly where it is, don't darken it, just try to make it unblurred, maybe that will help 00:26, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Add more shading to the back of the shoulder. 4:30 Sun Jun 2 2013

Cinderpelt (Alt.mc) ~ Redone
muuuuuuch happier with this. Redone because it had quite a few issues. 01:46, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Cute! c: Define the shading, it looks flat and maybe define the pale markings on the face and earpink a bit more 02:02, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thanks 05:04, May 31, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the head and shoulder area just a bit more? Looking a bit flat there. Nice job! 00:26, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Just an opinion, but the stripes look a tad pixelly. Looks great! Are there supposed to be stripes on the twisted foot? Kelpsey (talk) 18:30, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. A) - Redone
Last OA was Iceheart. Pattern was unrealistic and stripes needed to be defined. Comments? 01:18, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit, perhaps? If you think it's good, then you don't have to. Totally optional.

I think it looks fine, but if others agree, I'll define it 22:38, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

I think it could be defined a bit. Bb un   legs  22:41, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:12, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

There's a spot on his chest without shading that looks a little weird. Add some on there? It's right where the far foreleg meets with the chest. 4:28 Sun Jun 2 2013

Cloudpelt (D) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA be Misty - tweaked to lighten shading. Comments? 11:20, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten him up a liiiiiittle bit more.

Reuploaded  12:43, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

The paws and tail seem a bit gray. Could you fix that? And although optional, expand the tail highlight a bit? Bb un   legs  13:18, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on his haunch just a tad. 14:37, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:44, June 1, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part on his tail? 04:23, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading all over? 4:26 Sun Jun 2 2013

I actually don't think the shading needs to be blurred. ^^;;

Stormtail(Star) - Tweaked
OA is me, tweaked the shading and it wasn't nominated for it, but I tweaked the earpink and eyes. Comments? 00:24, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could you possible define the tail shading and the >>> paw shading a bit? Nice work! Bb un   legs  00:31, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

I think that they're fine. 00:38, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

Could you maybe define the unshaded parts a bit? It looks a bit flat. 04:22, June 2, 2013 (UTC)

On the eyes, could you maybe move one of the pupils a bit? They're looking different directions. 4:26 Sun Jun 2 2013