Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined 60

Petalfall (Star) ~ Withdrawn
Eheheh... Comments? 00:27, 20, 03, 2013

Blur the paw shading a tad? 21:05, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:22, 21, 03, 2013

CBA? ouo 22:40, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

I really hate doing this again :C 02:21, 22, 03, 2013

Duskwater (E) ~ Withdrawn
All colors are the same as the StarClan image. Comments?

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more 22:28, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

It's actually smudged quite a lot..but it's the color of the ear pink that doesn't make it seem like it. If I smudge it anymore, you're not really going to be able to see it.

Evil colors are evil. Withdrawing.

Stonetooth (Star) - Declined
Ohhai. 8D 00:08, March 2, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes don't match the pattern of the elder. Make sure they're in the right spots and the same thinkness and smudginess as the other images. 06:56, March 2, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Breezy, I tried to copy the stripes as much as I could. I'm so bad at chararts that I would kill myself. 22:08, March 2, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps show depth from the tooth extending over the jaw? I'm really bad at explaining, I hope you know what I mean ;w; Also color in the nose. 23:23, March 2, 2013 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' stupid wiki not showing changes -.- 00:12, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

The tooth wouldn't be that long, and it'd be a bit hooked. 04:16, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The tooth is being difficult.. 13:55, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

The pattern still doesn't match very well. Thicken the stripes some, and hook that tooth the other direction. But besides that, this is a good image and well over 50%, and also 80%, complete. I'll add you as an apprentice now. 07:06, March 4, 2013 (UTC)


 * D Wee~ Do I keep my apprentice state, even if the image is declined? 00:25, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, you do. We don't demote for declined chararts.

Could you blur that back highlight a bit, and then define the shoulder highlight? Last, he looks a bit like a dappled tabby at the moment...could you make the stripes longer and erase a few of the smaller flecks? 22:53, March 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for inactivity ^^;" 12:44, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

He still doesn't match quite right. thicken the stripes on the shoulder and follow the pattern more carefully. 07:34, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

His tooth should be more like a triangle or something, it looks strange right now. 22:58, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 01:54, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Yep. Re-uploaded. 20:56, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

I thinking about withdrawing this, but not yet, do I still stay as an apprentice if I do? 15:39, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Of course. 22:54, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 21:15, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Declined for lack of work.