Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Approval Page

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=Images Pending Approval=

Please use this section to put images up for approval only.

Applefur (W) ~ For Approval
Ah, what a fresh new day in PCA. Comments? 00:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe sharpen the mottles on her midriff? 00:34, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Icy on this one. Perhaps make them slightly less like texture as well?

re-up I tried (remember this is my first mottle) ;__; 00:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) ~ For Approval
Still going with 'er. Comments? 00:05, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail, leg and belly shading a touch? Dazzling, as always with Beebs's chararts c: 00:14, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 00:20, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Can you blur the brown spot on her tail? And possible define the shading that goes from her shoulders downwards. Very pretty. 00:35, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 00:41, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The brown spot could be blurred a teensy bit moer at the base. 00:43, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-up It's actually the tail shading, but close enough? 00:46, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Looks pretty accurate comparing to her warrior image. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:48, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Willow (Ki) ~ For Approval
she's cute; I am so happy 00:08, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her right arm and her stomach (or blur it, whatever looks better) and possibly the shading on her forehead. 00:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval
here we are 00:08, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading 00:32, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Star) - For Approval
RIP my darling, for I think you were killed far too early for my liking. All colors are from her other images.

Maybe add some depth to her non shaded parts? 00:31, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Don't know if this is helpful or not, but I'd maybe lighten up the eyes a little, perhaps? eek i'm not good at critique i'm sorry   notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:33, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

What do you mean? I don't normally use highlights, Icy, and I'd rather not add any for this one. Any other alternative suggestions? Should I define the shading or something like that instead? As for the eyes, they're colorpicked from her other images.

Sorry I'm terrible at explaining but like, maybe define the shading is probably a better word for it. 00:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Okay I wasn't sure sorry notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think I goofed up on this...

Leopardstar (Star) ~ For Approval
Richard Nixon. 00:38, 17, 05, 2014

Possibly blur the spots on her flank a bit more? Looks nice. notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:39, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thank you friend 8D 00:47, 17, 05, 2014

Good! notquiterocketwildbokan, Talk to me!  00:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC) I can't think of much else, anyone got something I'm missing?

Lizardstripe (Star) ~ For Approval
heres a lazily done lizardstripe 01:52, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt (Queen) - For Approval
Wow, I've wanted to redo this for a while and I'm not happy about the tail..

Ashfoot (Queen) - For Approval
First charart of approval started.. Sorry I don't know what I said. Anyway this is my first charart for approval, comments? :D -- Night Wolfy Moon  02:06, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

Blur and add more depth to the shading. It looks quite flat. Love those eyes <3> 2:35 Sat May 17

Tom (KP) ~ For Approval
Here's Tom. Not exactly my favorite character. Comments? 03:10, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading a bit, but they do look pretty neat.

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing yet. 03:27, May 17, 2014 (UTC)