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Storm (Ro) (Ki) - For Approval
This probably doesn't match well. 19:47, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading, shading depth, and smooth the shading a bit.

Reuploaded 20:09, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading everywhere. It might just be me but she looks tinted yellow compared to the other images. 20:17, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

^^I see the yellow tint too.

Reuploaded I put a shading tint on the image. (if that's what you're talking about) Sorry, I should have said something about that. 21:14, July 21, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on her other images seem more... Clustered, for the lack of a better word. If you'd like, I can try and dig up the file for the ES. (Though my attempt at matching her pattern is pretty bad hh)

In between the thick tail stripes should be very thin, hardly noticeable stripes, i think.

Reuploaded Hopefully this is better. :) And Fox, you don't have to dig the file out, you probably have so many other files and my computer doesn't load email anyway. 01:51, July 22, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading a little more on the face and chest? Also, do you think you could curve the neck shading rather than having it be sort of a straight line, if that makes sense? 01:15, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

awww she's so cute (he?) ((: a suggestion is maybe u could extend the stripes to the empty area on the right hand side? cuz there should be stripes on her haunch area. 04:23, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

Gah this is so hard to explain *.* but I feel like the stripes on her other images aren't as... Messy? Like they seem to form a more orderly pattern, if you get me. There also appears to be texture on her other images, so that also needs to be added.

Reuploaded Thanks Burnt. :) Hopefully this is close to what you meant, Fox. :D 00:35, July 24, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. 23:36, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:45, July 25, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading and smooth the bit of shading on the flank thing next to the -> arm

Reuploaded 21:55, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading between the front legs. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 21:59, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:27, July 26, 2017 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the <- arm and smooth it out a little?

Reuploaded  17:10, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more on the neck and face. 23:50, July 29, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:35, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes there 08:52, 7/30/2017

Reuploaded :) 20:16, July 30, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes appear to be a bit softer on the other images, also perhaps define the stripes under the shading? + smooth the shading on the ear

Reuploaded 18:17, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

doesnt she have a pale muzzle too? 21:16, 8/05/2017

Reuploaded It was already there but I defined it. :P 03:25, August 7, 2017 (UTC)

define the earpink a tad 21:09, 8/08/2017

Reuploaded 00:21, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

Deerdapple (Star) - CBA
Sorry for the late upload, got punished. Also, one sec for me to upload mine. 03:15, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:16, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

The colors don't match, would you like the elder file? Other than that, define the shading.

Smudge the ear pink a bit and I think the stripes are thicker on the other images. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:26, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm fine, thanks anyways Danny, :) 03:37, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any texture on the pale areas, define the eye depth, smudge the stripes, theres waste by the <-- elbow, define the shading depth, smooth the shading and highlights.

There is also waste above the back. Good luck with this image.

Reuploaded I'll need it. RIP 03:51, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on his other images seem to have more of a jagged look, if you get what I mean. The stripes here also kind of fade off a the they look blue at at least one of the ends. The eyes are very pretty on this, Pepper. :) 03:55, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you Shypaw. :) 04:04, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes.

Smooth the shading on chest and -> paw

Reuploaded 21:52, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Is that shading or texture on the muzzle? Because the muzzle and around the eyes include the pale non-textures parts (If it's shading, ignore this lol)

It's shading. lmao 22:14, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on the other images appear to be more messily smudged.

Reuploaded I tried. 23:27, July 31, 2017 (UTC)

Can you smooth the shading on the > ear just a little? This looks really pretty.

Reuploaded Thank you Spooky! ^^ 23:50, August 1, 2017 (UTC)

I think the stripes could still be sharpened to match the other images. On the elder, from what I can see the stripes were made with a solid pixel brush and then smudged with a 1px or 2px brush.

Reuploaded I redid the stripes, is it better? 01:07, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think the stripes are much thicker also. Maybe smooth out some shading on the forehead. Good job so far! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:18, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:43, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

There's waste on the back and --> shoulder. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 03:34, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

There appears to be a random dark spots on the <- paw, I can redline if you need it

Reuploaded I spent 10 mins seeing what layer that dark spot was on. xD 15:10, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

Wow, pepper this is amazing! Can you add some depth on the base of the chest by the elbows? 19:46, 8/02/2017

Reuploaded Thank you!! ^^ 19:59, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

The farthest forehead stripe needs to go down further

Reuploaded 23:06, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on the other images still seem more messily smudged; the stripes here are a lot softer, I guess? I dunno it's hard to explain

I wouldn't really say messily smudged, but if that's how you describe it... I would say they seem kinda wavy? I feel like Sorrel might have initially used a hard-edged brush with a size one pixel range to get the effect she got. After looking at it for a while.... I mean, matching stripes 100% is pretty difficult, but you had the right idea with the stripes on this version. These are a bit too soft.

Reuploaded 14:03, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes are leaking everywhere around the image 18:28, 8/04/2017

There's also waste floating around the image, I've pixelized it in green for you here

I think that's what Winter was referring to, Spooky :P

Reups I was gone all weekend, sorry. ;-; 16:30, August 7, 2017 (UTC)

theres waste on the tail 21:07, 8/08/2017

Reuploaded 22:05, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Spider Paw (Alt W) - CBA
i didnt even know i could charart with ibis paint, but um...here? if it screwed up the page somehow, just decline it. this is honestly just a test. 23:18, 8/03/2017

reuploaded. waste <span style="">23:40, 8/03/2017

Maybe lighten the shading a little, and make it so that this represents his design in the manga? (http://vvcap.com/B9zr4RVvk23) Also define the ear pink

im trying <span style="">23:53, 8/03/2017

I think the base color should be light and the pale parts should be white as they were on the es, but you'll probably want a second opinion or something.

just a test, so im withdrawing. going to do mistlekit <span style="">00:20, 8/04/2017

I would like to take over. 01:30, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

good luck <span style="">01:31, 8/04/2017

Re-uploaded: ... thanks? 03:05, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

I don't think his tail is white in the manga.

no, its not <span style="">04:27, 8/04/2017

Define the light on the legs a bit? 17:46, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

in fact, his paws arent white in the manga either. <span style="">22:42, 8/04/2017

Hey, I was just matching what Sunjaw had posted since I liked her version of the alt. No one ever informed me otherwise and it was approved with that design.

Re-uploaded: Um, I was matching the alt for the ES but all right. 02:40, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

i think there is leaking shading on the back <span style="">04:00, 8/06/2017

Re-uploaded: 17:21, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

This is really pretty, Icy. Maybe define the shading on the back paw furthest from us? It's just that the other paws look shaded and that one really doesn't. If that's intentional, though, feel free to ignore me. 00:47, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading depth on the closest front leg?

Re-uploaded: Thank you Ivy. 22:10, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Bee (Ki) - CBA
I hope I got the stripes right. Shading may seem dark? I don't know. I'm proud of this tbh. Bee bee buzz buzz. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:14, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes seem more pixely/sharp on the other images

Wow this is super cute c: the yellow looks a little too dull, and the stripes on the legs should be more horizontal. Also, you put the wrong date on the chart when you reserved this

'''Re-uplaoded. '''The colors are very much the same from the other images. It's probably the shading that is making it look dull. I also tried making the stripes more sharp but man they're hard, lol. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:14, August 5, 2017 (UTC)

Ok I guess I should have done this to begin with but I compared the colors from around the same spot on this image and the rogue, and the colors really don't look like they match (in the spot I circled it doesn't look like there should be any shading there so I don't think the shading is making it look dull) and the stripes still don't look sharp enough

Maybe make the stripes look a little like Deerdapple's? It looks around the same jaggedness?

personally i feel like the stripes are sharp enough, as these blanks are smaller, and ya cant really represent alot with them. besides, i dont see why cosmo would have to make the stripes as sharp as deerdapple's, because this isnt part of her set <span style="">01:15, 8/06/2017

Re-uploaded. The wikias being weird with my log in tbh, oh well. Did it another way to upload. I tried making the stripes sharper, but Broken is right. It's harder on these small blanks. This is as much sharper I'll go, at least. And Snowfall, I double checked the colors- it's the shading gradient I have on it with the shading. But it's the same colors, at least. http://prntscr.com/g4xde7 <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:29, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Sweetpaw (Alt. App.)- CBA
It looked better without white. Anyways: My first tortoiseshell. There is black spread throughout the image, it just looks overshadow with the brown base, ginger, shading, and smudging. Please don't make me brighten the white that's under the shading, then it might look like it's too bright and not under shading at all, but I won't complain or force you not to. Ummm that's all (also thanks David for telling me what to include) :). Oh! Wait. The tail shading looks really sharp but it isn't, it just clashes with the placement of the black and the smudging. TBH all the shading looks really sharp due to the placement of the highs and how much is going on, I swear. 04:50, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink a little? This color blends a little with the base.

I think the shading might have been covering it. Reuploaded 05:15, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Could you possibly define the ginger? She looks more like a patched brown cat rather than a tortoiseshell on my screen

Reuploaded 18:55, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Bubbling Stream (Alt W) ~ For Approval
Yes, I know the tail shading is horrible. I'll redo it later.

DOesn't she need texture, or does she not because she's a altErmineGlow (talk) 16:01, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

I think that since this is based off the manga, it shouldn't have texture. Although I'm not sure.

Can you recede the shading on the chest, then a little on the haunch? I just feel like it covers a bit too much with this source. I also think the shading needs to be smoothed out in order to add more depth :)

The farther front paw needs to be white, as shown in the manga. <span style="">16:38 Fri Aug 4

re-up Nope. Nope nope nope.

The shading it leaking a bit on the haunch and on the closest back leg. 17:48, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the edges of the shading to give it more of a gradient-style look. Unless you're going for a smudged look? Which in that case, you should probably have smudged all of the shading, not just the edges. It cuts off a bit too abruptly and then changes to an all block-y look.

Define shading depth? 23:25, August 4, 2017 (UTC)

Uh, Skye I'm not quite following? Sorry if I sound like an idiot but I'm not understanding what you want me to do.

i think she wants you to smooth the shading Star <span style="">02:04, 8/05/2017

I know that, but I'm going for that smudged look, and smudged shading is really hard for me. Like what does it mean to smudge all the shading?

I'm sorry, that was phrased badly and I was tired as hell earlier. Smudging all the shading means not just the edges. With this image, there's the edges of the shading, and then where it abruptly changes to what seems to be a solid darker gray coloring. You see on this file of mine? Like how it's smudged throughout the entire shading layer, instead of just the edges? I mean try something like that.

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define the shading depth <span style="">17:33, 8/05/2017

also, define the earpink better <span style="">21:17, 8/05/2017

re-up

Could you define the shading depth on the tail? 19:22, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

Can you maybe smudge the belly shading? Just that really dark bit near the front leg?

re-up

maybe fix the tail shading, as it appears to be very blotchy <span style="">19:59, 8/07/2017

Okay but, the tail on this blank is so small and shading it right is difficult so imo it looks just fine but if someone else agrees with broken then ignore this lmao

I think the tail shading's all right, but the shading on the chest and haunch could be smoothed out a little more. 00:48, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

re-up

Define shading on back legs. Also, maybe make the darker shade of the shading blend in more with the lighter shading. (If you know what I mean?) I see two different shades, or that could just be me, lol. Also smooth out the shading on the hind leg closest to us. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:55, August 11, 2017 (UTC)

Mistlekit (CJ) (Alt K) ~ For Approval
for being called gray

define the head shading a bit <span style="">16:53, 8/04/2017

Reuploaded

Expand and smooth out the shading along the -> side of the blank.

Reuploaded switched some things around, too

Define the shading depth and smooth out the shading on the tail

Reuploaded

Smooth the tail shading a little more? 00:45, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

define the nose color, its looking white on my screen <span style="">18:42, 8/09/2017

Reuploaded

Honey Pelt (Alt W) ~ For Approval
how do you even short-hair <span style="">16:52, 8/04/2017

I'm asking the exact same question. XD Smooth and lighten shading.

re-uploaded. working on tail shading and whatever, dont comment on it please. <span style="">17:30, 8/04/2017

reuploaded. the tail shading is disgusting, but i can actuallly charart from the mobile <span style="">17:47, 8/04/2017

Smooth out the shading and darken the tint. I feel your color choice clashes with the gray a bit too much.

re-uploaded. liking this alot more now <span style="">18:28, 8/04/2017

Still gonna need to smooth out the shading. The transition from shading to non-shaded areas is too sharp if you're going for the blurred look. It should be more of a soft gradient.

re-uploaded. working on mobile is hard <span style="">19:12, 8/04/2017

I think the tail shading would be swapped to the other side, because the shading is all on < side of the image elsewhere, so idk. Disregard this if you're trying to go for a light source that's from up above, but from looking at the ears shading placement, I gather the light is hitting < way mainly

re-uploaded. i suppose. to make things easier, i just swapped the ear shading too <span style="">19:43, 8/04/2017

This looks nice! Maybe smudge/blue the ear pink just a tad?

re-uploaded. <span style="">21:32, 8/04/2017

Could you smooth the shading on the muzzle and ear? Nice work! --ErmineGlow (talk) 19:18, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. never have i seen the charart list so empty <span style="">20:01, 8/06/2017

Smooth out the haunch shading a tad?

re-uploaded. tried. <span style="">18:56, 8/09/2017

Maybe add some slight light to the back hind leg closest to us. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 04:52, August 11, 2017 (UTC)

there wouldnt be any light there, with the source im going by <span style="">04:58, 8/11/2017

Spottedleaf (Alt. Star) - For Approval
For her appearance in shattered peace. I tried a source from the bottom and to the right, if there's a spot of shading u think should be moved/doesn't belong point it out please because I have no idea how to use this source

are you certain she should be black and white? <span style="">20:03, 8/06/2017

she isn't white in that. 20:04, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

I made the base gray??? It's color picked from a pdf the hex code is #0d0c1d

it still looks white. 20:08, August 6, 2017 (UTC)

havent read shattered peace in a while, so maybe just make her a tortoiseshell but exclude the white?? thats how she would look, from what im gathering <span style="">20:11, 8/06/2017

reups grayified

@Broken, this is exactly how she looks in the manga, i double checked, so she wouldn't be tortoiseshell. This is how it's supposed to look. <span style="">20:17, 8/06/2017

Can you smooth out the patches? They look a bit too hard-edged.

reups I kinda liked how they were before but eh

Can you darken the gray? It's been a while since I read the book, but I'm pretty sure the gray was a lot darker. 02:31, August 8, 2017 (UTC)

It really wasn't. I colorpicked from the image (http://vvcap.com/1zBQgiEtCvi). I don't think I can get closer to the color.

in the manga she looks so creepy with her empty black eyes. define the eye depth just a little <span style="">06:06, 8/09/2017

reups I know. Why did they have to make StarClan cats have black eyes??

Deadfoot (Alt E) - For Approval
Why do I keep using SAI for charart when it is so much easier on Photoshop? Oh right, Photoshop doesn't want to work properly right now >.> <span style="">00:55 Mon Aug 7

prehaps soften his gray face, seems a bit sharp <span style="">00:57, 8/07/2017

I think he was deputy?? Plus I think this is too minor to be an alt, but you probably need 10 more opinions

it was confirmed he retired to the elders' den by firestars quest, and while the manga has an inconsistency, he wouldve been an elder by then <span style="">01:02, 8/07/2017

Reuploaded He was an elder and was confirmed to have died shortly after that appearance. And not trying to be iffy but I will wait for word from Jayce before relinquishing this. <span style="">01:14 Mon Aug 7

You're not being iffy. You're waiting for the leader to comment. =P If we're going with the discussion on the talk page, this is too minor to warrant an alt. But, since that discussion isn't concluded yet, we can't decline based on that.

Snail Shell (A) ~ For Approval
Wow, this piece was fun to do, and I'm pretty proud of it! Comments? 19:31, August 9, 2017 (UTC)

This is so amazing Vec! Mind smoothing out the shading right below the upper arm part on the arm closest to us, if you get what I mean. :P 23:10, August 9, 2017 (UTC)