Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 25

Brook (Alt W)- Tweaked
She needed a torn ear and her eyes should be grey, unless they were described amber or whatever. OA is Mistystar 139. I think. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 00:45, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

She was described with amber eyes, so add that back. 01:36, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. My mistake. ^^ Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 01:54, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights don't make sense, unless the sun is underneath her...can you fix that? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:52, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

The sun could be in front of her maybe... Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 23:48, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, Sky, I think you should redo this :3 I'm not the leader or deputy, but this is practically plum coloured, the shading doesn't make any sense, and the earpink is way too big and not the right colour. I'd put it on the redo list, and just redo it. You could ask Iceheart or Scarlet for formal affirmation, but this really does need to be redone :P 10:20 Wed Dec 21

^ I think the ok from two leads should suffice. Go ahead and redo it, knock yourself out. 17:08, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, I agree, redo. When you do, could you make the torn ear match the PH and queen images better? It's more of a V on there. I know this matches the warrior version exactly, but in my opinion, that one doesn't match her other images. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  03:21, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry it took so long. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 05:03, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, don't be, this one looks way better! Changes aren't showing, btw, check the history, and blur the highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:04, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 07:57, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make this gray-brown, as opposed to grayish :3 08:10 Sun Dec 25

I took the colour off Bird's charart, just made it a weenie bit greyer. But I should still change it? Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 08:32, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I think so. And thicken the lineart on the ear. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  11:04, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste by her head and torn ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 11:20, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ALright, how bout now? :3 Sky-Jedi  You will talk to me. 22:45, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Waste by her muzzle o3o 03:22, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="purple" >Sky-Jedi <font face="Cambria" size="2" color="orange"> You will talk to me. 05:51, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Improvements made. 03:23, December 30, 2011 (UTC)