Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Declined Art 7

Foxpaw - Withdrawn by User


I'm amazed that there wasn't another one started while I was gone. Here's also an updated Foxpaw image as well.-- Shimmer Crystals 03:24, 26 November 2008 (UTC)


 * The outline is really blurry in places, and the ear should be more blended into the pelt. Bright pink ears look unnatural. Koda


 * The shading is too light, and isn't really buffed out like it should be. But this looks pretty good. F  x  C  23:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)


 * I added the line art back in the places it was needed.-- Shimmer Crytals 01:10, 4 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Cool. I did Icepaw, just to partner up with your Foxpaw. A little tweak with the darken tool on the shading. Mallinois   The Doghouse  20:30, 13 December 2008 (UTC)


 * I got a bit on the bored side and decided to update this. Its boring when you get out of school at 1:30 O_o-- Shimmer Crystals 19:53, 28 January 2009 (UTC)


 * The outline is blurred into the background a little bit by the neck. --Mallinois The Puppy's Crib The Puppy then howled bravely - Ui! 22:14, 28 February 2009 (UTC)


 * I would like to withdraw Foxpaw so I can work on Crowfeather more.-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 02:32, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfur - Withdrawn by User



 * I also made a few edits to Brackenfur before I reuploaded him. Comment please cause I think he needs more work, but I can't think of what.-- Shimmer Crytals 03:27, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

 

I think this looks good Shimmerpool. I can't think of anything right now that needs doing except maybe the shading could be blended slightly more along his chest fur. Apart from thst I think this looks great!-- Sandy 19:16, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

This needs shading, of course. Also, the tabby markings need to be blended better. A pretty good start, but of course, it needs improvement. Also, there is a "swirl" in the lower leg area, if you see where the curve is, a little above that. You might want to put a tabby marking there.-- Jakko 123  21:34, 4 December 2008 (UTC)


 * I would like to decline this submission at the moment. I want to finish up Crowfeather and Foxpaw for now. Once I'm done with them, I'll come back to work on him if I'm feeling up to it, which I probably won't cause of midterms.-- Shimmer Crytals 22:13, 14 December 2008 (UTC)


 * I have changed my mind and made the decision to keep up Brackenfur. I came up with a new color scheme for him and got more ideas with shading messing with GIMP for the past few weeks. Comments please would help revive this cat.-- Shimmer Crystals 20:23, 28 January 2009 (UTC)


 * Withdrawing him cause I want to work on Crowfeather and also I can't nail his tabby markings right >_<-- ♪Shimmer ♫ 02:34, 15 March 2009 (UTC)


 * It look a bit sqiggly, try spacing ou the tabby markings and add fewer like Squirrelflight's. --Mallinois The Puppy's Crib The Puppy then howled bravely - Ui! 22:15, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

RavenPaw~Withdrawn by user
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa251/cathy08_09/RavenPaw.jpg

What do you think? I wanna help with the project, too. (if that's ok...) --Mumble785 01:15, 21 December 2008 (UTC)Mumble785


 * Welcome to Charart Mumble :) I see this is your first try out. Now let's begin. Ravenpaw is, yes a black cat, but you could make him a bit lighter so you could add shading. Once done with that, add your shading and blend away. Good luck ;) May I suggest when getting the lineart, save it to your computer. That makes it easier instead of having to upload it to photobucket time after time again. Also I advise to use Photoshop or Gimp when doing these.-- Shimmer Crystals 05:58, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

This has a lot of unneeded color blotches, and something looks wrong w/ the eyes... Other than that, you need to shade and really amp up the blending on the white-tipped tail and the chest(which by the way has a white dash, not white splotch.) And the image needs to lighten up, too. Sorry if I sound harsh, but this is really what is wrong with the image. What image editor did you use? --Mal lin ois  15:32, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok.I'll work on it some more using your tips. ;) Thanks!--Mumble785 14:07, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

P.S. What program do the other people use, where do they get it, and does it cost anything? Currently, I'm using paint. *blushes from embarrasment* (I know I spelled embarrasment wrong.)--Mumble785 14:25, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Paint? *Shivers* That's a problem. Most people use GIMP. I color my images with paint, and edit them with GIMP. G B 39 17:46, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok. I'll check GIMP out then, and trade google sketchup for it. THEN I'll work on ravenpaw some more.--Mumble785 18:06, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Any other programs besides GIMP that will work for this? Dad won't let me download it. :( --Mumble785 23:39, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm putting ravenpaw on hold. I have the program I need now, but I would like to concentrate on fireheart, and regaining my cool after that last coment on my kittypet blanks. --Mumble785 23:26, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

Withdrawn. I'm never gonna do 'em, i guess.