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Tuna (Ro) - For Approval
Behold the glorious tuna fish! And yes, I now about the tail shading. I shall fix it next re-upload. ErmineGlow (talk) 21:33, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

define light on the legs (all of them), and smooth the haunch shading 21:36, 9/07/2017

Reups I accidentally uploaded this iamge as Tuna.png, and not Tuna.rogue.png, so could somebody please change that? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:54, September 7, 2017 (UTC)

Add more light on the legs and face, and smooth out all the shading

Renamed.

Define the shading a bit on the front leg furthest from us, and the light on the front leg closest to us. 01:30, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

think you can make the shading by the hind leg curve a bit? it looks add cutting right across the thigh. 09:20, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Tuna is tasty --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:21, September 8, 2017 (UTC)

Try and curve the haunch shading more - still looks the same in cutting across the haunch. I also think that the light needs to be defined on the the < side of the cat, and definitely expanded on the face.

Define the ear pink. Good job. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:24, September 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light on all legs/paws, and on the tail

could you expand the shading on the back and flank? 12:11 Mon Sep 11

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:16, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

He needs to be a tabby (unless my cite is wrong, then ignore this)

I have the ebook version of Tigerheart's Shadow, so I can't check. But if somebody who does have the solid version can verify it, I'll add it. I'm assuming you have it, as you added the site? --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:10, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

I checked it. He is confirmed as a tabby. 21:27, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Ahhh I lurve him with stripes --ErmineGlow (talk) 21:43, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the light on the paws again

Define the shading depth on the tail and hindleg closest to us, just a tad. 20:55, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

think you can connect some of the tabby stripes to each other and the legs and back and tail? they look a bit more like mottled markings to me as they are. 22:42, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reups I changed the stripe pattern and shading, though I think now I maybe should have tried to change the previous one. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:29, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe connect them on the back like how a ticked tabby would be. They still look like they're all over the place. Maybe add a dorsal stripe and add more stripes to the face, legs, and tail? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 20:16, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

can you define the light on the front paws a little more, and maybe smooth the stripes a tad? 0:40 Thu Sep 14

Define the earpink^

Reups How do you facial markings? --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:32, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

there's waste around the ears

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 02:50, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

It's still there, it's like a triangular patch between the ears

There's also some above the nose

Reups

Define the shading on the ears^

Reups --ErmineGlow (talk) 23:15, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly taper the stripes, especially on the face? They look paintbrush-y, and people have been told to adjust that before. 01:16 Wed Sep 20

Still see waste around the ears. I can redline if you'd like.

\Reups' The waste snuk back in there in the last reups. --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:23, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Raindrop (Ki) - For Approval
shiny rain kitty 12:18 Mon Sep 11

smooth out the darker shading... ? if that makes any sense lol 13:07, September 11, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the ear pink a bit. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:30, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Are you using highlights? If you are, could you dull them down a little bit? I'm not sure if it's shading clashing with the base or not...but she seems kinda shiny?

re-up 23:59 Tue Sep 12

can you make the nose solid black?

Define the light on that back paw a little^

re-up 21:04 Sat Sep 16

re-up again i wasn't liking the shading so i changed it up. 21:43 Sat Sep 16

re-up again again i promise this is the last time i just accidentally turned off the nose/earpink layer 21:45 Sat Sep 16

Smooth the neck shading?

re-up <span style="">2:23 Thu Sep 21

Birdy (Ki) ~ For Approval
I messed around with the shading layer a tad, I'm trying a new style. 22:39, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

She seems a little.. not neon.. but unnaturally colored (unless this is colorpicked/similar to her manga color, then ignore me)

I don't know, honestly. I don't have the color version. 23:08, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe try #8d6d48? That's what I got when I colorpicked from a picture of the color version.

Reuploaded Thank you so much Star! That really helped. 00:35, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a bit under the chin? Define the ear pink and shading depth. 02:22, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:46, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

Could you darken the shading a little bit? It's a little hard to see. 21:03, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

I almost feel like the neck shading should be receded a little tiny bit, as it being shaded even on the > side of the cat kinda contradicts the light source imo.

Still working? 20:30, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Streak (Ki) ~ For Approval
Since I never got around to it: to everyone to complimented me, thank you! 22:57, September 12, 2017 (UTC)

the line of shading on the --> seems a little too straight. could you curve it a little so it follows the body more? if that makes any sense. nice image btw <span style="">0:03 Wed Sep 13

Could you redline or circle where you're talking about, Princess? I just want to make sure where to curve it. 10:18, September 13, 2017 (UTC)

here's an outline of the area <span style="">0:33 Thu Sep 14

Reuploaded I don't know if this is any better. Also, thank you! :) 21:01, September 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the --> front leg a bit? 01:40, September 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Increased the opacity of the shading by a few ticks so it might have helped make the leg shading more visible. 19:44, September 16, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out tail shading. Looks good! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:15, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks... but I think I ruined the tail shading. 23:52, September 17, 2017 (UTC)

Could you please define the tail shading? --ErmineGlow (talk) 12:20, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded My motivation is blah. (Also darkened the shading again by a few ticks, could help to define it.) 00:00, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the tail shading in particular, though? I can see an overall definition, due to the darkening, but the tail shading still isn't very visible/dark in comparison with it.

Reuploaded Smudged shading is driving me crazy. I don't know how much more I can do to make it appear darker and not hard-edged. 20:59, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (Lo) - For Approval
01:59, September 18, 2017 (UTC)

can u define the gut shading some 00:06, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:28, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly define it a ittle more and maybe make the neck and chest stripes more visible? Good job! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:44, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:16, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Tigerstar (AVoS) (Lo) ~ For Approval
Why is he leader? 02:29, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Because he's not that bad of a character and deserves it a heck of a lot more than some cats do. Define the light on the front two legs?

Reups Fair point. I'd rather have Tigerstar than Crowstar. Also, I went ahead and defined the light on all of the legs since the back ones seemed a little dark, too. 12:50, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? Beautiful! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:44, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

honestly though, i think the shading is alright on the legs. it seems dark enough, yet you can still see the stripes below. <span style="">05:11, 9/20/2017

Uhm, nvm, then.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 05:37, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

I have to agree with Cosmo that the leg shading could use some work.

Husker (KP) ~ For Approval
All colors from loner. Comments? 17:16, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the pale belly slightly?

Reuploaded. 20:39, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Is there any way you could add some shading to the head fluff? It just seems very flat compared to the rest of the image imo 00:31, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:55, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Little Mew (K) ~ For Approval
lookin like a hotty// probably change the shading colour to black hmm 21:33, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

This looks great! Define the shading a smidge

re-up ill define it better on the legs 21:47, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

re-up 21:50, September 19, 2017 (UTC)

Isn't Little Mew supposed to match her father? The brown on the main body here seems darker than Husker's images. 00:29, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Little Mew, Pad, and Husker are all the exact same coloring. The colors do need to match.

I can give you the file for Husker's loner image, if you'd like. Also, I don't believe that this can have texture. If manga alts aren't allowed to have texture, I don't see why these should be any different. 07:04, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Shanty (Ki) - For Approval
Wow how did I never post this. Everything from her kittypet. <span style="">01:12 Wed Sep 20

So adorable. Poor Shanty.... can you make the stripes on the back right leg a bit more visible?

So beautiful, so Shanty. Smooth out the shading a smidge. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:43, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Diesel (KP) ~ For Approval
<span style="">02:44, 9/20/2017

The markings are great. Can you define the shading on the right ear? It looks a bit more faded then on the left one.

re-uploaded. <span style="">03:09, 9/20/2017

Define the ear pink. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:42, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

re-uploaded. this is lousy. <span style="">05:10, 9/20/2017

Diesel (Lo) ~ For Approval
Geez this was hard. Also will upload later to tweak shading.

On the kp (i know it's not approved yet, but it was the first one uploaded) the stripes on the body and tail are pointed the other direction.

i think the stomach shading is leaking near the front leg <span style="">05:06, 9/20/2017

If the kittypet was uploaded first, shouldn't this be short furred as well? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 05:35, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Star had no way of knowing that Broken would have her image be short furred. Give her a bit of time to fix things up to match, it hasn't been long since she uploaded. I'm not trying to be mean in any way, just trying to explain why it's going down like this.

Broken's is posted first, therefore she holds the master pattern claim here. All Star would really need to do is change the pelt length anyways. Everything else looks pretty good to me, in terms of matching. He is in fact shown with the shorter fur (compared to Graystripe, who has long fur), hence why I added it to his description.

Pad (ki) (lo)~ for approval
cutie pad :3

-nightleaf32

Smooth out the shading. Also, define ear pink. Good start. 16:35, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

This is the first time Ive done any of this :/  - nightleaf32

He needs to have long fur like his alternate image. Also, you need to match Husker's image in terms of color, as they are shown to be the exact same color. 17:58, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

there's some waste above the head <span style="">20:06, 9/20/2017

RE-UP how about now? - nightleaf32

There is waste all around your image. Also, maybe check out the Apprentice Turtorials, I find those helpful. It is linked on the Charart page. 20:18, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Expand and smooth out the shading on the image. This also needs to be named as File:Pad.kit.png. 20:24, September 20, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light source

RE-UP

Remember to put your signature when reuploading, nightleaf. This is a good start so far. There is waste between the tail and the body and below the tail and <- paw. Also, could you expand the shading a little bit and define the shading depth? Once those are fine, I'll start nitpicking about the markings. Remember, Apprentice Tutorials are your best friend here. 01:05, September 21, 2017 (UTC)