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Gorsetail(P3) (Alt.W)~ Declined
She has been described as a mottled tabby, any comments?--BlueDeino 08:03, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. Beautiful`~ 08:04, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, doesn't she already have an alt for this? The Alt queen? 08:06, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

-nods- she does. This will be declined, I'm sorry. Pad foot Mischief Managed 08:07, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. 09:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Mousefur (Alt. W2) ~ For Approval
She was shown to be a light brown in The Darkest Hour, so Comments? 13:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Lighten it up and blur the shadin. Skt Like a baws  13:38, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base color a bit more. 15:10, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

A lot more actually. This is in no way light, it's the same color as her main image. Also desaturate the earpink and thicken the shading on her neck/shoulder. 15:16, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png.

Reuploaded 20:24, May 28, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Nice, Moonshine<3 Blur the earpink and shading a bit and rename it File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png Just take away one .png. 20:29, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Just a tip from an old coot. ;) I advise, with lighter cats, adding a second layer of shading where the shadows would be darkest, like at the base of her tail, back of her head, behind her front legs, etc. It gives the charart a more three-dimensional look and feel that might help out a bit. 20:37, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I changed the heading, since Mousefur already has an alt warrior. This is the second alt.

This should be called File:Mousefur.warrior.alt2.png. No need for the extra .png. Blur the earpink and shrink it. 00:01, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 06:20, 31, 05, 2012

Define the neck and haunch shading. 08:26, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights" on the face and tail. 05:45 Sat Jun 2

Shrink the ear pink and make it more triangular.

Moon was having issues, so I uploaded for her. 18:11, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, blur it, and center it in the ear. 19:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:31, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, it's very sharp-edged. 22:27, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. 21:40, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Now they are ;) 22:28, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. It looks a little too close to the bottom of the ear.

Still working on this? Skt Spoilers... 22:32, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Rowan helped a lot. 19:55, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and there's some...darker color around the earpink. Also, make the earpink less...pink. 18:41, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:13, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think I'll CBA this since it's been sitting here for a little bit without a comment. 19:27, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but that ear pink still bothers me a bit. It needs to be blurred a bit more. Other than that, the rest of the image is fine. ^^; This next part is //totally optional//, but could you define the shading just a tad?

I think there's waste on the edge of the image. 19:36 Tue Jun 12

Reuploaded I blurred the earpink to the max. if I blur it anymore, it'll look weird. 20:04, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well, make it more triangular, maybe that should help a little, I'm not going to tell you to blur it more. 20:08, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

There also still seems to be some darker color around the earpink; please fix that. 22:53, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the brown just slightly less golden, and get rid of the blurred lineart on the ear. 22:33, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this?

Yes, Reuploaded 01:51, June 17, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Can you lighten her up a bit, since this is ment to be light brown, it doesn't really seem like that to my eyes. 03:48, 17, 06, 2012

There's a few pixels of waste a bit in front of her chest. 09:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts? 14:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 22:31, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the overall shading some more and thicken it on the shoulder. 01:25, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the ear closer to us. owo 15:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt.W) ~ For Approval
-Found one like a baws- pity it had to be Hawkn00b.....comments? c: Skt Spoilers... 00:47, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading and the "highlights" edges a bit, imho? 06:42, 15, 06, 2012

Nevermind, wrong version. >.< Epic baws, this time define the shading a bit. 06:45, 15, 06, 2012

Doesn't this need scars?-- 11:03, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Since the scars were revealed in Fading Echoes, I'd say no, as this was in Midnight. Skt Spoilers... 13:36, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the midriff shading a bit. o3o It's looking sort of pure black there. 06:17, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I uh, redid it since I was a derp and forgot to make a xcf...-whistles- Skt Spoilers... 06:57, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit.

Blur the shoulder shading a bit. ouo 10:01, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shoulder shading doesn't need to be blurred, in my opinion. 14:55, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Nightstar (E) - For Approval
Comments? 00:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading.

Enlarge the lighter area on the haunch, and blur the shading on the face a tiny bit. Lighten the shading a smidge, too, as I can barely see the lineart. 00:48, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I can't really tell the light source, you might want to redo the shading. 03:38, 17, 06, 2012

Blur the earpink a bit, and maybe add more depth to the shading - it looks pretty flat right now. 09:43, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit? Also, lighten up the shading on his back/haunch, I can't see the lineart there. 14:54, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Plumwillow(Alt.W2) ~ For Approval
In the SkyClan's Destiny manga, at the time of her warrior ceremony, she was depicted with stripes on her legs and head. Comments? 02:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit larger and blur it. Also, possibly add more stripes to her haunch and/or make the stripes a bit longer so it matches a bit more compared to the apprentice. 02:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink and blur the stripes just a tad. 02:42, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 02:46, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. 02:47, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

They are for me. Make the ear-pink a tad smaller, it looks like it's about to fall out of the ear, and center it more. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 03:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the leg stripes a tad. 03:17, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 03:25, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I believe this is ment to be based off the alt apprentice, right? If so make the haunch stripes go up the haunch more and add more. Good work Ducksplash, I believe this would be 80% complete, imho. 03:28, 17, 06, 2012

Blur the leg stripes a bit more, and I think (just my opinion) that they could be just a bit higher up on the haunch. 09:45, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear pink ouo 12:36, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. 12:37, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Storm, the pelt isn't required to be smudged into the earpink on the warrior blanks. 12:39, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. 18:16, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded =) 20:30, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink a little more~ 21:08, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:19, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I saw waste. =p 21:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit. Nicely done, Duck. You've improved greatly since you last put up a charart. =)

Reuploaded Thanks, Cloudy! 02:51, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Earpink didn't match the others. 03:10, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. 06:14, 18, 06, 2012

Reuploaded 15:18, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: There was a lighter streak down her back. 15:49, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Alt. R)- For Evaluation
For being described without stripes, or darker spots on her feet or muzzle. Comments? 17:42, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. Maybe make her brown too. 17:43, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

It was in the manga, and Sharpclaw's alt for in the manga was gray.-- 17:44, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and highlights as well. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 17:46, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't really seem like there's a light source...but one giant blob of shading. Also, kill the waste around the image. Also, the heading needs to be for evaluation, not for approval.

You should also blur the darker ears and tail a little. Breeze whisker  17:53, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Don't know if there are changes showing.-- 18:14, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. 21:00, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

There's also a white pixel under the tail. 22:09, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

There's still a blob of shading, smooth it out. 23:07, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

I suggest taking a look at the shading tutorials~ And make dat earpink go down onto the head then smudge it up ouo 06:08, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Alt. KP) ~ For Approval
Meh. I prefer darker cats. e.e Comments? make the earpink a leedle bigger and define the tail tip owo <span style="border: 3px double #540C13;padding-top:8px;-moz-box-shadow: #00132E 5px 8px 8px; -webkit-box-shadow: #00132E 2px 3px 5px;background-image:-webkit-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-moz-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background-image:-o-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%);background:-ms-repeating-radial-gradient(ellipse,#FF8E2B 10%,#D44700 20%,#750C00 40%));border-top-left-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-left-radius:85px 40px;border-top-right-radius:85px 40px;border-bottom-right-radius:85px 40px;">   j  a  c  k   never let go,    diane ❤   02:46, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ear pink annoys me. e.e