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Snowdrop (Kittypet) - For Approval
i like to shade white cats Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko Kanzaki. 20:35, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Very pretty! :D Can you define the light on ---> ear? 20:40, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Squidward Plays All  Star. I Am Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:45, February 26, 2019 (UTC)

add shading depth?

Still working? 23:36, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Still working, I'm gonna re-up tonight <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:43, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reups an attempt was made <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 21:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Where is your light source? <span style="">1:37 Mon Mar 4 2019

Looks like its coming from --> side Malina457 (talk) 02:04, March 5, 2019 (UTC)Malina

Can you define the light on the legs 17:01, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Still working? 19:21, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah I have this ready I've just forgotten to re-up it my focus has gone to trying to get waspwhisker white right aaah I'll re-up it when I'm on my pc <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:01, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reups + shading fixes so <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 20:48, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth th3 shading some? 00:15, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think it looks pretty smooth....maybe just a tiny bit more. Could you define the light on the collar? 19:22, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

I honestly think the shading's smooth enough and doesn't need to be tweaked at all.

define the shading depth <span style="">12:05, 3/14/2019

Myler (KP) ~ For Approval
Based him off my own pretty kitty :) and Spooky told me to add a bowtie so I hope that worked out 00:46, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading and define it on the white please 06:58, March 1, 2019 (UTC)

The paw pads are also multicolored, when they should be just one. 15:05, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Not necessarily, paw pads are artists choice Malina457 (talk) 15:35, March 2, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded Think I fixed shading, and BTW I based the pawpads off my kitty :) 04:05, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading slightly on the collar? 04:31, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

smooth the shading on the flank a bit.

01:23, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

Yeah, sorry, I've been busy all week and haven't had time to get on the computer. After my band assessment today I should have time. Wish me luck! 17:36, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Straight superiors! Also, I'm sorry, I can never see what I'm doing with black cats 04:12, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading on the leg nearest to the belly? the shading looks super rough. great job! ^^

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07:47, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded better-ish...? I couldn't really make the shading there cooperate 18:13, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you lighten the shading? it looks dark (its noticeable bc of the shading on the white) 10:49, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I should've known using black shading on white would come back to bite me 21:12, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

with your lightsource the entire stomach would be in shading <span style="">12:06, 3/14/2019

Elder blanks - For Approval
aaa ty all so much!!!! Whiskii ✿ 02:49, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i believe that the heads are just very slightly too big (from reference images, it seems like a cats body is around 2 (2/3) heads) 03:02, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the nose bridge a bit - like this. 12:22, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. with the way the <-- whiskera are pointed would the --> left ones show? I adore these 12:30, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

Might be my personal problem but could you make the smile a little less connected to the whiskers/less...noticeable? I love a smile and a small one is cute but this one seems overly large for a cat. Idk. These are really good though! 19:39, March 2, 2019 (UTC)

i agree with what winter said about the smile– i also think it would be more in character if it were lessened 03:45, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hows this look? blanks are hard!! Whiskii ✿

hm, it still looks as though the whiskers/mouth are touching maybe curve the mouth down a tad instead of up? 15:18, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Are changes showing?

last nitpick– the long hair tail's seems to lie unnaturally flat, could you maybe add more fur lines there? i love these so much 15:26, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

This is optional; but maybe since they are elders add little lines under their eyes to make them seem older?

15:35, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Mind checking for a few darker gray lineart pixels that aren't quite black? There's a few scattered around on it

i think wiki's having a problem rn or somethin because the changes arent showing, ill get to theother comments in a sec  Whiskii  ✿ 16:59, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded are the changes finally showing? also i tried putting a line under their eyes but it blended too much with the whiskers. i may still add it if you really want to  Whiskii  ✿ 17:08, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the blanks could benefit from a line under the eyes - just to make them look older. 18:07, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I also just wanted to point out the longhair's tail is like that because its supposed to be flat on the ground ^-^  Whiskii  ✿ 18:40, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

I mean they look fine without the line imo 20:27, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

Agreed; the line might make it too crowded. 22:19, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded tried something out, thoughts? Whiskii ✿ 22:46, March 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I think these look great! 02:25, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

Personally I think the lines around the eyes (both on the left side and near the snout) should be removed. Cats don't really have any sort of creasing in those two spots no matter what age, so it doesn't make much sense for them to be there. The shoulders are also too defined, especially on the longhair, and the tail curve is a bit unnatural right now. Also, I don't have the time to draw a test lineart tweak to check, but have you made sure that the haunch area looks good when the tail is removed? Cause that was a slight problem on the old versions, and even on the kit blanks I had to completely redo the haunch after I realized it looked weird when they were used for a short-tailed/tailless character. If you've already checked and made sure it looks fine like that, you can ignore this bit of the comment.

reuploaded removed the eye lines, made the shorthair's tail better, kept the longhair's tail as is, because i cant really do much else with it, removed most of the shoulder line. also the haunch area looks fine when tail is removed, you just have to draw it in correctly  Whiskii  ✿

changes arent showing on the shorthair :(  Whiskii  ✿

reuploaded there was waste around the image? o.O also i think its working now! changes are showing! Whiskii ✿ 15:09, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

now the changes for the waste arent showing -.-  Whiskii  ✿ 15:10, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded hopefully this fixes it  Whiskii  ✿ 23:13, March 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not sure but on the shorthair, I think the ears need to be brought forward so the neck curves naturally into the head - something like this?  16:13, March 7, 2019 (UTC)

I looked at some images of cats in this position and their backs appear more arched and their shoulders are not really visible;, , as a reference. Could you also make the body longer? They look a bit short right now. 20:17, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

Gonna give a redline on this when I get some more free time later, but I did wanna point out that it's not clear if this pose is supposed to be the kind of bunched up pose that patch linked, or a more relaxed pancake-y pose like this. Either way the spine is two short right now, but whether you lengthen the entire body a lot and keep the arch roughly the same or lengthen it just a bit and make the arch much more pronounced, that's kinda up to your interpretation of the pose (though yes, please do remove the shoulder lines, they're not visible in either case).

reuploaded i think the wiki is being weird again! sorry for lack of uploads my life has been super busy lately! Whiskii ✿ 20:57, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, the wiki's being really weird lately. So could you provide a link for the changes? Unfortunately, I can't see them. c: 16:08, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the changes on my screen :P here's a screenshot <span style="">16:10, 3/13/2019

Thank you! I still believe that the ears on the shorthair need to be brought forward so the neck curves naturally into the head -  like this?  18:27, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

I'd really rather not, i already moved the ears forward  Whiskii  ✿ 19:24, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think they could he moved forward, just like 3 pixeks or so? <span style="">19:42, 03/13/2019

Leafstar (L) - CBA
Sorry for the delay on this. Whoever made this pattern is a freaking idiot, it literally took me like 5 hours to finish this image.

Could you add some shading to the nose? -- 19:48, March 8, 2019 (UTC)

hm I believe she needs mottles 01:49, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think she has a scar on her chest. -- John made it. He’s the only one. Rest of us… no.  But… I tried. In the end. I did.  03:59, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

She does have a scar. Either Paleh forgot to add it, or it's under the shading and could be defined. Still, marvelous job! 04:33, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry, I had stayed up for like 24 hours when I made the first version of this so I was majorly spaced out lol.

CBA?

Henry (KP) ~ For Approval
Oh well, I know he isn't listed on the charat list, but we have a name, and we have a description, so why wouldn't he get a design? And also since we can make tabbies whatever color that we want I made him sort of bracken colored! Axolotls are my children!  03:30, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

didn't david claim this already? --

04:11, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Yep, it's David's claim. 04:12, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad! It isn't on the reservation table so I didn't know :P  Axolotls are my children!  05:00, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Ah yeah, their the OA so they'd get first claim. It's all good though. 05:06, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

you can keep it man. I don't think I really want it anyway 11:52, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Guess this will keep going, define light on back legs. --

14:31, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

This is probably personal preference but can you make the stripes a little less curly? 18:28, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reups! Any better? Axolotls are my children!  22:31, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

The light is great on the back legs! define the shading a lil more on the paw nearest to the tongue? this is pretty ^^ --

02:10, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

hmm this is going to be controversial, but I don't think this looks like a tabby because of all the identical swirls. Maybe add more variation and some straight stripes?

Reups Those stripes were difficult, but I hope you like it! I kept everything the same but the stripes layer :)  Axolotls are my children!  15:28, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Hm.. could you thicken them just a tiny bit? This is really good ^-^ 23:05, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

That's artist's choice. <span style="">1:53 Thu Mar 14 2019

shading is leaking a little by the back part of the tummy and the leg underneath it <span style="">12:07, 3/14/2019

Dark-colored StarClan cat (Star) ~ For Approval
Well that's a lot of typing in the heading... I apologize now if this is named incorrectly 04:45, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Not bad! Blur the pale chest into the fur a bit more, as well as smudging the fur into the earpink (thought it is your preference). 04:48, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading please. --<span title="vision kinda blurry, whatchu call that? i don&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' t light the blunt too hot" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=vision kinda blurry, whatchu call that?&#10;i don't light the blunt too hot"&gt; silv  <span title="lost a little money, made it all back luckily i&lt;span data-rte-entity=" style="">' ll work this out" data-rte-attribs=" style= title=lost a little money, made it all back&#10;luckily i'll work this out"&gt;  seven-headed snake, whatchu' call that? bleeding like an open scar   04:59, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly darken the gray a bit to be a darker gray as with the light it doesn't seem like a dark color cat. 05:09, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a touch. I would reccomend 2-3 clicks with the burn tool and that should do the trick. 15:53, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Kitty 18:23, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Given the source, there needn't be any shading on the back^^

Define the eye depth. 19:18, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

This cat is from Crookedstar's Promise (I think), so it would have to be SE-6, not 4.-- 16:39, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Potato, as I've just said before, please don't comment just to mention a file name. It can be taken care of once the image is approved. Right now, as long as it follows a basic naming guideline, it's perfectly acceptable and one of the staff can take care of it later.

Reuploaded Redid shading. It's just easier. Which probably now means there are a bunch of other problems to fix but c'est la vie 21:51, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Found the file, File:SE-4.star.png. Next time keep a consistent file name ^^ Could you smooth the shading more? -- 07:14, 3/14/2019 07:14, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

i think the shading is smooth enough tbh. but could you define the light on the tail? also theres some leaking shading at the bottom of the chest <span style="">12:07, 3/14/2019

Splash (KP) (KP) ~ CBA
figured i'd finish him. --

08:37, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define shading as well as the light on the legs. 18:26, March 9, 2019 (UTC)

reups --

05:43, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define the tongue shading and light on the tail. Also, he needs to have green eyes, so the blue will have to go. 16:44, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

The loner has blue eyes, so it will have to be tweaked. I'm sorry I haven't been reuploading.-- 12:52, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups changes. --  Silverfur's      starry      paws       ~  13:11, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Worked!

CBA?

Violetshine (Alt. Ro) - CBA
wow it's been a while since i did a black cat 21:10, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

Texture needs to match the alt apprentice. 22:49, March 10, 2019 (UTC)

It looks like it matches just fine to me, could you define the light on the whire some? Its appearing gray mainly on the front paws and muzzle. 00:06, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

she needs gray eyeliner ^^ it goes under the texture. also if you ever need it, i have the apprentice file.

02:26, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:06, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Stonestar (L) - CBA
My changes don't want to show for some reason, but I think you might be able to see my version here if you can't on the main image. Hopefully it'll start working soon though. 19:09, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

The file uploads are all wonky but I can see your image here!! 19:16, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 20:17, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

why do I break CBA if I hate it? oh well, Ear pink is leaking! Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  23:19, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can you also define/expand the earpink some? 23:27, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

oh, and some waste by the ears! Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  00:25, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 17:30, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-CBA? 23:48, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Black-and-White Kittypet (KP) - For Approval
Something weird is going on with uploads and wikia....my image is here but it doesn’t show up like that on the file uploads. It still has potato's image shown??? Anyways Jayce I hope you explode over this (in a good way) 19:19, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

Could you perhaps lighten the shading a tiny bit in the ear? I LOVE THIS.

Reuploaded I lightened it on the white parts too. Now I’m happy with the shading 01:35, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading the on the white some and smooth the shading overall 01:48, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Dark Forest tabby (DF) - CBA
heck yeah.

I loooove this. Do you want to fill in the pawpads or is it optional? 22:40, March 11, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Definitely not optional... I just forgot. Oops lol. Changes probably aren't showing, see here.

CBA? 14:51, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Pale Minor She-cat - For Approval
My first attempt at a charart on here, so I hope I've done it right! 03:37, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Awesome job! Define the shading/add more all over. If you can, define the earpink a little bit. 03:46, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the tail shading and define the eye color? It just seems white to me. 04:10, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Unfortunately, the wiki seems to dull all the colouration, and I can't quite figure out how to fix that. 04:29, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

While the shading is gorgeous, where is your lightsource coming from? I'm thinking from above, but some areas are lacking shading that would otherwise confirm this (I'm upgrading you to an apprentice btw keep up the good work :D ) 20:01, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

The ear pink is still hard to tell what color it is, would you mind darkening it by a few shades? 22:04, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Redefined the shading to match the more general shading idea of the blank while still keeping the additions for body definition, and tried to darken up the ear pink as much as possible. 07:43, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Also when you re-upload, try doing it under the same name so there isn't so many ^-^ but heres a redline. The red is basically where the general shading should be, the blue is the light, and the purple was where I beleived the shading should be smooth. 03:40, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Isn't quite how I imagine the light source, as I imagine a sun setting toward the 'camera', but definitely will take that into mind! I was having to use new images as unfortunately the changes wouldn't show unless I did. I can try and just replace the images instead? 04:54, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

I was primarily going off what I saw. Currently, you could try uploading it under tge same one and using imgur for the changes. 05:20, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

can you smooth the shading more? disregard if this has been said after your previous upload <span style="">12:09, 3/14/2019

One Eye (L) - CBA
changes 04:45 Tue Mar 12 2019

This absolutely marvellous I????? How did you get so good at charart?? Anyways I know it’s a pain but if you could just plleaaaaseee define the shading everywhere a bit, that’d be perfect. :) 05:09, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded too much free time haha!; also just in case changes here :D 05:16 Tue Mar 12 2019

is this the old blankWillowstep21 (talk) 13:45, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

They uploaded with tge new blanks, wikia is just bein stubborn and not showin it. 14:53, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? This looks awesome! 14:47, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Fidgetflake (KP) - For Approval
<span style="">20:30 Tue Mar 12

the black on the flank ends sorta abruptly! Winter is coming,  my dearest  friends!  00:16, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

It's meant to end pretty abruptly, that's the style I had on the other images.

could you define the depth on the shading some 23:04, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine. <span style="">1:44 Thu Mar 14 2019

Minor characters DF 10 (DF) ~ CBA
20:56, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

is it possible to erase a tad of shading on the white on the front without messing up the source so we know that, that's white? If not just disregard this. 21:54, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Better? 01:13, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

That is a lot better, yeah. 01:52, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Zelda (KP) ~ CBA
i dont remember how i made the kittypet the first time. im also a fraud whos only played botw 21:42, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Fraud. Is it just wikia messing with the image or are the eyes missing shading?

): https://vvcap.com/EF40pZ4aw does it look the same there?? 23:27, March 12, 2019 (UTC)

Jeez the colors are way different. Nah you're good, it's just wikia.

CBA?

Large tabby with sharp claws (Q) ~ For Approval
welp, here's me a torbie, I'll fix the light on that foreleg and the elbow shading soon 00:25, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, okay light for that leg and the shading on the elbow is fixed. 20:09, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

changes figured I'd add this since wikia is being stubborn 23:03, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Talon (Alt cg) ~ For Approval
uh wiki is being so annoying and not uploading my changes >:( so here boop --

11:43, 3/13/2019

According to the official image the white needs to go down further. Also, the stripes need to be less visible.

is this just my screen but i see the old blankWillowstep21 (talk) 13:57, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

@Willow, wikia is not showing changes to images recently, which is why it appears to be the old image. Silver already mentioned the problem and linked to the new image. 14:46, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Dang wiki! Its so cute! but only the link shows it. anyways, is it just me, or is the earpink to orange? Axolotls are my children!  15:31, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add some shading to the belly and behind the front leg? <span style="">1:48 Thu Mar 14 2019

The earpink is alright? I could desaturate it, but all around it's fine -- 06:48, 3/14/2019 06:48, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reups changes -- 07:05, 3/14/2019 07:05, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Okay wiki is kind of working, probably wouldn't upload my changes later -- 07:09, 3/14/2019 07:09, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Marshscar (L) - CBA
Changes here.

hm i feel like with this lighting the part of the tail near the body and further down the chest could use a little bit more depth? 23:24, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Shading looks fine imo <span style="">1:47 Thu Mar 14 2019

Hmm i agree that there should be more depth down the belly, just slightly though

Reuploaded Yeah tbh I did get slightly lazy with that final darkest shading layer.

Looks better, CBA?

Dark Forest Tortoiseshell (DF) ~ For Approval
Not sure if I named this right, as the numbering seems off. Comments? 20:51, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

OwO where is the light coming from? Axolotls are my children!  23:19, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

I believe the light is coming from <--- 02:05, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

That is correct. 02:10, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

Frecklewish (SC) (KP) - For Approval
allll right let's try this again now that i have a bit more time. Made a couple alterations since last time. Changes are here. 21:09, March 13, 2019 (UTC)

Darktail (Alt L) - For Approval
Hand drawn shading. Its not texture, just shading. I finally found a shading style I like. <span style="">01:06 Thu Mar 14

Snowstar (Le) ~ For Approval
here is a son, I tried to match the StarClan as best as I could 03:25, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

OST Tortie (DF) - For Approval
- i literally have no idea how to name these minor character things. Basically, this is the tortie that attacks Dovewing and has a quote on the page 04:53, March 14, 2019 (UTC)

this looks like a brown and black cat. Maybe make the brown slightly more ginger? or add ginger

just wanna pop by and say torties do not have to have ginger on them. this appears to be a chocolate tortie. maybe make one of the browns slightly more cream? <span style="">10:50, 3/14/2019