Warriors Wiki talk:Books

Trivia
Forgive me if I make no sense because I'm. On my phone. I was stalking the wiki and I recalled that on a few book articles. We have a section for trivia, some of them list all the issues in the book, some of them list none, some of them list a little. I believe we should decide for the layout. Should we include. All trivia? None? The important ones? 02:36, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

I noticed that before too and was actually going to bring it up but forgot :P I think that errors shouldn't be listed in the trivia, because in some books (like MFV) there are just so many of them that none of the other trivia would be noticeable in all of it. I don't think that mistakes are that important anyways, but we could link that book's section in Mistakes in the Warriors Series in the trivia and say that the mistakes in said book are listed there. I think that's what you are talking about? 00:08 Fri Sep 16

I agree. But, there should be some trivia, imo. Just the stuff about the book itself, like what the working title was and other major things like that.

Anymore comments on this? 03:30, September 22, 2016 (UTC)

I could understand if it's a major mistake, such as the issue with Graystripe and his kits in Bramblestar's Storm, since I think that warranted a reprint, but minor mistakes, such as description, gender, eye color errors, ect, shouldn't be mentioned in the trivia, but on the Mistakes page as well as a given character's article. Working titles, plot changes, and other tidbits about the books themselves are appropriate, while the Mistakes page is beneficial for the rest of said mistakes....

Although now that I think of it, that page is getting extremely long. Would there be a way to possibly shorten that with the use of subpages or something along those lines?

Good idea. Any ideas for it? 01:15, October 2, 2016 (UTC)

I'd be good with separating it per arc, since having a page for each book might be a bit tedious. But yeah we should totally to that^

Bramblestar's Storm/Chapter 1 ~ Silver Nomination
It's been so long since I did something for Books. If somebody claimed this, I'm dead. 00:37, October 4, 2016 (UTC)


 * Add a quote
 * Berrynose comes up behind him, agreeing with him. -redundant, and also Berrynose and Bramblestar are redundant through 1st paragraph
 * Link 'mentor' and 'patrol' too^
 * Check for past tense aka this and a few others throughout summary -- Amberpaw asks Berrynose where they were going, WindClan or ShadowClan and what they will do if they see trespassers. Also for this maybe add a transition in the sentence since it flows a bit oddly?
 * Bit of choppiness sentence-wise at the end of 1st paragraph, too
 * First sentence of second paragraph is a run-on; and in 2nd paragraph Amberpaw is redundant; also link mouse to Prey, and link apprentice in there too
 * Rosepetal, Berrynose, and Bramblestar redundant in center of 3rd paragraph; Sedgewhisker is too, at the very end, so perhaps swap one out with 'the WindClan queen' or something, and also change 'pregnant' to 'expecting' since that's Clan Terminology
 * In the last paragraph, check for redundancy, and bits of past-tense.

Actually for the mouse link, it should be linked to Prey instead of Prey, since the second only links to the prey page. 02:22 Wed Oct 5

I'm right now in school, and secretly working on it... any suggestions for the quote? 13:38, October 6, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps use one of Berrynose's towards the very back end of the chapter, or one from the altercation with WindClan.

UPDATED Okay, I hated Berrynose's whole "CLAN NEED MORE CATS" speech cuz I thought it was way too long. So I shortened it. 01:04, October 7, 2016 (UTC)

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Moth Flight's Vision/Chapter 8 ~ Silver Nomination
it's so rainy outside rn :P

I suck at constructive criticism, so probably trust someone else for this :P 01:18, October 7, 2016 (UTC)
 * Add the link from General Clan Information to Category:Clans and Groups in the third paragraph
 * I don't know why, but for me, the she-cat (describing Cow) seems a little redundant. Probably not, but it just bugs me a little... maybe find some other descriptions?
 * Like above, this is probably only me, but "The WindClan cat" is used for Moth Flight quite a lot. Like Cow, try to find another description...?

Updated Fiddled with it some. It's kinda tricky, since Cow wasn't named in the first part of the chapter

Yikes I hate being a killer, but I'm so sorry - Last thing, I really promise. 02:04, October 7, 2016 (UTC)
 * Micah's yellow tom seems a little like the abovey...? Maybe like rogue, barn cat, etc., I don't know. :v

Updated Gotcha, thanks^^

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Shadows of the Clans/Gallery ~ Silver Nomination
I did the main article nomination, but the gallery wasn't added until after that. Here goes

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November FA
Any ideas for this month? Maybe Warrior's Return? We haven't done a lot of the manga and if we finish that off maybe we could make way for the fifth serires and if TR and BS ever get finished. 16:21, October 8, 2016 (UTC)

Sure^^ That works

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Hollyleaf's Story/Chapter 3 ~Silver Nomination
Comments on this? I'll probably fix it up later. Song  heart  02:03, October 9, 2016 (UTC)


 * Perhaps expand the quote description
 * Put the character lists into split lists {mclist things
 * 'Hollyleaf', 'Fallen Leaves', 'She' and 'He' are redundant throughout the summary -- perhaps try to go through and add some other descriptions.
 * Check for past tense in the first two paragraphs
 * ledge is redundant in the middle of the second paragraph; and also 'asks' is quite redundant throughout the summary
 * Link 'fish' to Prey and link kits to Kit
 * Check sentence capitalization in the third paragraph


 * Fixed There is this one part the first paragraph that probably wasn't written well, but it refers to events before the chapter:

''During the time she had spent down there, Hollyleaf felt as if many seasons had passed since she started exercising, but Fallen Leaves assured her that the moon wasn't full yet. He had told her to exercise in the cavern and he would leave her for most of the day and all night.''

I think it's fine, but if it seems out of place, are there any suggestions I could use to fix it? Song  heart  22:53, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

It seems fine to me, but there's a couple of things that you can fix in the part itself.
 * The first sentence seems like a run-on. Shorten it somehow?
 * "He" is a little redundant in the last sentence. 'Nother description? 11:32, October 10, 2016 (UTC)

Fixed it. Song   heart  19:04, October 11, 2016 (UTC)

Missing Book Covers and Wrong Description
I sawn that there are some Book Covers missing in the gallerys but I have no Idea how to add them there. How can I show them to you? Also, the description of the third cover here Twilight/Gallery is wrong. Its not the "Traditional Chinese Language Edition Released in Taiwan", it should be "Simplified Chinese Language Edition Released in China". The one released in Taiwan is not in the gallery jet. 13:51, October 9, 2016 (UTC)

Does no one have an answer for me D:? 10:17, October 15, 2016 (UTC)

If you want to add pictures to the galleries, upload them using the proper names (examples of acronyms can be found here and naming conventions here), then use the cover template to add them to the page. Or just ask someone like Maple who adds gallery things a lot and they can add the ones you found. And if the description in the gallery you pointed out is wrong, then just change it?