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Guardian Cat Blanks ~ For Approval
Is this right? I don't know what to name the file, or the heading. I can change it later if needed. But thanks everyone who voted for me!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:41, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure how approving a blank works, but I would wait until someone who has been here longer than me says how to name it. Anyways, could you make the ears a little longer on both blanks? Many cats have longer ears than what is shown on the blank. I think that's how comments on blanks works. I would wait until someone who has seen a blank approved to comment before you do this though. (Just to make sure I'm commenting on this right). 12:08, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

The front legs should be longer and the front paws flatter CØØKIE (talk) 12:22, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I believe  the heading needs to be Guardian Cat Blanks - For Approval. Can you make the inner lineart a bit thicker? (If that makes sense) Most of it appears to be 1px

the eyes should be somewhat smaller, and maybe make the longhaired tail more fluffy. it is long fur, after all. 16:12, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe the nose shouldn't be connected to the eyes, or spaced out a bit more? :) 17:56, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Don't know a lot about anatomy, but I think it only looks connected because of how the face is situated/the direction the cat's head is facing?

I think it's ok, when the eyes get made a bit smaller there'll be more distance to represent the bridge of the nose. maybe make the nose slightly smaller too 18:25, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Make the tail a bit longer.

The left front leg looks a bit smaller and squished than the others. 16:57, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

I'll upload later tonight, sorry for such a wait for the past couple days. I'll rename them gc.long.png and gc.short.png when I get the chance tonught and thanks for all the critiques. I appreciate it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:30, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, Cosmo, can you rename them guardian cat.long.png and guardian cat.short.png? 00:07, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yes I will. Also, I'll need to upload them under two different files as I realized it as these are only under one file. I'll get around to that sometime tonight or tomorrow! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:08, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

It's good, Cosomo. Blanks are not held to the same time restrains as regular images are; that would be impossible, due to the fact that anatomy is difficult and forcing someone to produce a new blank in a short amount of time by restricting them is just asking for rushed and sloppy work. Doesn't mean you can take two weeks to upload though, it just means that the one-month limit does not apply here.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks for all the nice comments and sorry for taking so long to upload. I may edit the eyes again. They still bother me, lol. But I think it's looking better! Also, uploaded with two different files and renamed them with the proper naming, and thanks to Appledash and Jaycie for being so kind about this! It means a lot. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 23:21, October 24, 2017 (UTC)

You're doing a great job, Cosmo! Anyways, could you make the tail on the short-haired blank end a little thinner? If I know one thing about cat anatomy, it's that a cat's tail becomes thinner as it nears the end of it. 01:17, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

Make the eyes a little wider and more oval, and space them out a bit. Also I feel like the hip should be wider on both. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 12:54, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ears should still be a little bit smaller and more pointed, the lineart around the paws is still a little thin, plus the front paws seem....small for lack of a better word? like when you look up a cat sitting down, you know what I mean? 04:34, October 30, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for taking so long to upload. I got caught up with homework, and then I got really sick. Hopefully, I'll upload tomorrow!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:42, October 31, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I still think the face is way off. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:55, November 2, 2017 (UTC)

to match the style of the other blanks, i think you should make the fur tips less round, if you get what i mean.

Could you widen the -> eye on both blanks by like one pixel? It looks a little off to me compared to the other eye. 10:20, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you thicken the paw lineart just a bit? Particularly the two front paws. And this is beautiful! :D 13:37, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the eye lineart? ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

I think the thickness of the eye lineart is fine. On all of the other blanks, the eye lineart is one pixel thick, so why make it thicker here? 22:55, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps make the nose(s) a bit smaller?

When will be introduced schemes of shadow on this chararts if chararts be introduced in wiki? I can not wait to start making Fierce! ::::D – 14:14, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Please don't comment unless it's a critique. I know it's taking a while for me to upload each time, but please be patient. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 14:31, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''These are turning out much better. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:28, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

they are, dude. I think you should thicken the linear art on the tail a little bit.

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:58, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Thicken lineart on paws and ears

I think the ear lineart is fine, but agreed on the paws ^^ These look awesome so far!

I think the cheeks are a bit too wide, maybe make the face a bit more narrow? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 16:46, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

The right hind leg seems to be sticking out to far. Maybe narrow it. Gosh Cosmo this is a great blank! 13:30, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:30, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Bring the line for the left (our left) cheek on the shorthair to the right a little, it's still a touch too wide. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 20:43, November 17, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:08, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

So the short-haired blank's legs are a bit more straight, while the long-haired ones are slightly curved. Is this intentional, or allowed? Lmao I've never been around for any blanks being approved, so I'm not very sure. Sorry. <span style="">00:45, 11/19/2017

I see what you mean now. I'll fix them to curve a little bit to match the long-haired. And then I'm gonna thicken the neck and shorten the hind leg on the short haired blank as well.. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:49, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

Could you make the <- ear on the long-haired blank match the short-haired's ear? And perhaps thicken the ear lineart on the short-haired blank as well. These blanks are really coming along! 14:43, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

Not sure if it's appropriate, but I think that the back on the short-haired one could be a bit more curved? Loving these blanks though! 22:35, November 20, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks !! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:54, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

I think they're supposed to be the same blank besides the fur length, but the short-hair is smaller than the long-hair. I think it's mostly the leg length

Fringepaw (Lo) - For Approval
Wow, sorry for deserting the wiki! I'll try to be more active. 01:59, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the facial shading a bit? I know it may hard to see it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:57, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Cosmo! 03:13, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Waste. :P 00:16, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light a little on the tail and hindleg furthest from us. Maybe smooth the shading a little, unless it's supposed to be a bit bold. 17:57, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?

Declined due to lack of work.

Taking over/reups 

Should the nose be black like the apprentice ? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 05:50, November 24, 2017 (UTC)

The apprentices nose isn't black. the shading makes it look like that, though. From what I can tell, its probably the same color as the ear pink, so that's what I made it.

The apprentice's nose is the same color as the fur

reups hm. idk why it really looks pink to me. probably the shading tint you used

Dewpaw (Alt A) - For Approval
hi

Define the shading a bit?

He looks more dark brown then just a neutral brown. <span style="">20:46, 11/17/2017

Pretty sure that if the shade isn't specified, you can choose whichever one you want.

Shade is my choice unless one is stated. Actually, Broken, the base color is the one you used on your version. I liked it.

I'm honored!! :o Anyways, can you soften the haunch shading? <span style="">22:52, 11/17/2017

Re-uploaded. I think it only looks that hard because there's also a stripe or two at the edge of the haunch lineart.

Define the shading on the belly? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 02:36, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yay, a comment. 8D

Maybe define the shading on the legs? If others think it's fine, ignore this! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 03:44, November 24, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the face shading a little bit too?

Sandynose (Ki) ~ For Approval
I love doing kits. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:28, November 19, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs please. Great job! ErmineGlow (talk) 13:11, November 20, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:42, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear a bit? 15:36, November 24, 2017 (UTC)

Okay so a few questions: 1. Does this have texture? I know the textures supposed to be hard to see but I can't see it at all here. 2. Does this have the paler muzzle/chest? Also, the only face stripes should be the lines next to the eyes (shouldn't touch the eyes) and the stripe on the forehead. One last thing, the stripes are a little bit smoother/blurrier on the other images. (Sorry for the long comment lmao, this looks awesome)

Oh. I didn't realize there was texture. No, there isn't a pale muzzle/belly. It wasn't on the warrior or apprentice that I didn't see. There's the stripe on the forehead. It's hard to see with the shading up there. Ok. I'll make sure to fix all of this. I'll smooth them out a little bit. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 21:43, November 24, 2017 (UTC)

Gravelpaw (Ki.) ~ For Approval
Ereeee <span style="">00:14, 11/23/2017

Add some lighting to the back paw. Perdy! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 00:42, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ThANK <span style="">00:52, 11/23/2017

Nectarpaw (Lo) - For Approval
Ew 16:31, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit?

Reuploaded 17:57, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

Just a tiny bit more on the main body? And define the tail shading too.

Define the earpink if you can? <span style="">18:20, 11/23/2017

Define the shading on the tail. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 19:08, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

Jayce already said that ^^ Define the shading depth on the farthest back leg?

Reuploaded tfw you're about to reupload but a new comment popped up 19:41, November 23, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the ---> front leg a bit? 15:34, November 24, 2017 (UTC)

Which leg are you talking about, Vec? The closest one to us? 17:13, November 24, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah the leg closest to us. My bad. ^^; 02:48, November 25, 2017 (UTC)

Fringepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
been a while since i made a charart <span style="">23:38 Thu Nov 23

You need to have a date in the reservation table.

Define the ear pink in --> ear. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#team litten 05:51, November 24, 2017 (UTC)

re-ups <span style="">15:20 Fri Nov 24

Smooth out the chest and head shading 15:38, November 24, 2017 (UTC)

re-ups probably looks worse now but i tried <span style="">16:52 Fri Nov 24

The base looks a lot darker than the other images. I can barely see the shading here.

re-ups i colorpicked from the apprentice image but this should be a bit lighter now <span style="">21:02 Fri Nov 24