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Spiresight (GC) - For Approval
this took like forever to finish, rip because GIMP wanted to crash But I am the Chosen One 17:12, June 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading. This is great c: 03:55, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Re-Ups also thanks But I am the Chosen One 05:57, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

Did you add the texture? With as dark as this is, it's pretty hard to see. If you did, lighten the base a tad so we can tell what's what. For reference, the StarClan image is the first in this set. (  19:28, 6/26/2018  ) ​

Re-Ups, yeah there is texture. But I am the Chosen One 19:54, June 26, 2018 (UTC)

CBA? 00:49, June 29, 2018 (UTC)

Sorry to break this, but I can't see the texture at all. Please define it a lot.

Re-Ups, darkened the texture. But I am the Chosen One 20:10, June 30, 2018 (UTC)

poke, its been a few since its been uploaded. But I am the Chosen One 20:13, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

As I just told you, you need to wait five days before asking for comments. Anyways, I still can't see the texture at all.

Re-Ups, its pretty dark as is now; hopefully its visible. But I am the Chosen One 02:01, July 4, 2018 (UTC)

It is still faint. Any way you can make it more visible? 19:53, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe add some lighter texture. That may help 20:05 Fri Jul 6

Still working, Mink?

Hunter Blanks - For Approval
I plan on resizing them but that's easier to do toward the end. I also want to edit the tail on the shorthaired blanks a bit. Ref for the pose can be found here. 17:01 Sun Jul 1 2018

can u make the longhair tail somewhat fluffier 19:08, July 1, 2018 (UTC)

Could you add whiskers? 00:30, July 2, 2018 (UTC)

You don't have much of a limit here, but I'm just going to bump this so you know that you do have at least two comments here. Not sure if you've seen them or not.

Add more fluff to the longhairs shoulders and neck? 20:23, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Fierce (GC) ~ For Approval
So I forgot to edit the paw, but I can fix that later.

Define the shading on the tail? 02:35, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

re-up Any tips on how to fix that paw would be greatly appreciated, as I cannot lineart.

Maybe curl the paw a little bit? Not as much as if her leg/wrist was twisted, but enough to round it off? Idk I'm sorry if this isn't easy to understand. I'll do a red line if you want 23:03 Tue Jul 3

A redline would be nice, thank you.

Here Hopefully this helps. 20:24 Fri Jul 6

Still working, Star? I know you just got the redline two days ago, but I’ll still check in. :) 08:00, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm still working. I'll upload this later, since that's when I'll finally have all the time I need.

Uh, Sun, can you link somewhere that isn't TinyPic? Because that link isn't working for me.

nvm sorry for this mess Thanks again Jayce. <3

There be waste near the paw leftover from the previous paw shape.

Unknown Resident Blanks - For Approval
I'll fix the paws and some anatomy soon. Just wanted to get these up. 18:42 Tue Jul 3

There’s waste outside the back paw on the short hair 23:25, July 3, 2018 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed some things that were bothering me. I may need to tweak the pose a little bit but for now I like these. 20:37 Fri Jul 6

I think the front legs should be slimmer? Not entirely sure, though. 21:45, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

I feel like we'd be able to see the cats thigh bent somewhat more? and the front half of the body seems a bit thicker in comparison to the back, which seems a bit thin if you get what I mean? the front leg closest to us also seems a bit too thick in comparison to the rest of the legs. 01:31, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Beetail (W) - For Approval
I'll fix the flank stripes later, just wanted to get this up. 21:43, July 6, 2018 (UTC)

Just a suggestion about the stripes: they should be more "connected" and tangled if you get what I mean. Also, did you receive the file? Just wondering.

Yes, I did. 04:14, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

Maybe smooth the pale chest into the brown a bit more. Blurring might work. Good job! 08:16, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Smooth the shading on the neck too.

Dew Nose (W) - CBA
好恶心

nice can you define the shading on the body and legs a bit? 01:28, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks. is this any better?

Yes, much better! The two pixels outside the lineart of front chest, underneath that little tuft of fur, are coloured in. Sorry if this is nit-picky, I just thought I’d mention it. I have on other images. 08:12, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

There’s also waste all around the tail and outside of the rear end/back leg. 08:14, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Nah, you're good

CBA?

Hawkheart (K) - CBA
aw well those eyes aren't even remotely creepy looking. 03:29, July 7, 2018 (UTC)

This is awesome, Patch. Define the shading depth a bit. 08:10, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you^^ 18:06, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, this is awesome, I agree. CBA?

Rushtooth (W) - For Approval
LOL I don't remember how I made the DF <span style="">15:12 Sat Jul 7

That dark forest is beautiful, anyway, maybe smooth the darker shading spots, they look a tad off to me, and a bit hard edged Malina457 (talk) 15:46, July 7, 2018 (UTC)Malina

Smooth all of the shading, maybe. Great job! 08:10, July 8, 2018 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) (Ro) - For Approval
all colors from the queen.