Warriors Wiki talk:World/Archive 10

Dog ~ Silver Nomination
I'm expanding it right now, and I think it's ready! 18:21, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! After you're done, we'll see how it looks...remember to add citations! :D 18:25, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

There! I added all the citations. I don't know why, but it was fun to add citations in! XD 02:00, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wait wait wait, I just read all through the dog article, and it has darkest hour events in the firestar's quest section. I changed it, but I don't have the Firestar's Quest book anywhere near me and I don't remeber a good most of it, so I don't know if dogs appeared in the books more than once. Spottedstar42 The WWi ki van dals Mu st fall!!!  16:24, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

oh, sorry. I meant I don't have the Darkest Hour book on me, not Firestar's quest. Actually, I don't have etheir, I have to get the books from the library. Spottedstar42 The WWi ki van dals Mu st fall!!!  16:30, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

As far as I am aware, Sootpaw never appears in The Darkest Hour. Everything I said that belongs in Firestar's Quest is there because I actually did a search for dogs in the book and all the results shown were the results I put into the article. I don't think dogs appear in The Darkest Hour at all, the exception being page 41, where there is the distant barking of a dog. I put everything right back and I would appreciate if in the future you would consult me before changing the article that I worked on. 17:31, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome work! There's been tons of improvement since you started. Could you add one or two citations to the last paragraph of Secrets of the Clans? Other than that, its great! 16:35, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I'll see what I can do. 18:57, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I added some! I absolutely love adding citations! Is it better now? 19:02, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great! Could you cite the last sentence of the top paragraph? If you can't, its fine. 19:31, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I aded that in. Anything else? 22:01, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Meant to say added. 22:11, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great! CBV? 22:15, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Vote is up! 18:14, June 16, 2011 (UTC)