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Branch (HJ) (Ki) - CBA
dont we all love it when our art programs hate us and our siblings pester us and we need food 23:15, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart, and it also needs to be named in the correct format to File:Branch (HJ).kit.png.

Donee 23:27, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

It only says "Branch.ki.png, are you missing the t? Also, define the earpink a little, I can barely see it. 23:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading as well, and add a bit more depth to it. 05:58, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaddedd  21:34, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading again please. It's still hardly noticeable. (btw I love the design you gave him!) 21:39, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink again as well; I couldn't see it on mobile or laptop very well.

Reuploaded  03:19, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink some more.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:58, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the stripes some? i'm having trouble making them out throught the shading 16:39, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

reeupploaaddeddd  04:15, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 18:07, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Please wait for at least five days before asking for comments. With activity how it is, three days isn't a good enough span of time. That being said, what's going on with the ear pink in <- ear? it looks unsmudged and like it was... idk, kinda sharpened and it seems to have these pixels at the end of the ear that look a bit off?

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't know about the rule change >.< 22:52, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? 21:39, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define --> ear pink.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:29, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  02:10, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define it some more. Maybe put it above the shading layer.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:34, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  I put it between the first and second layers 23:54, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Mudthorn (Star) - CBA
Too bad no one cares about him lol. 00:20, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

This is good! However, there's some waste all along the tail.

Nightslash Da Warrior of Shadowclan rar 03:27, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you, but I didn't see any waste? Perhaps I'm not seeing it. 19:15, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Have more shading along the edge of the tail? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 03:41, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reups. Expanded the shading on the tail. 04:43, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just me but the colour of the fur doesn't seem to match the warrior.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:34, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reups ...Yeah...you're right. 15:17, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

blur the earpink some more.Stealth f🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:42, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reups Yup yup. 01:14, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? 00:47, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Luna (KP) ~ For Approval
23:01, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Great job on the eye color and pelt markings! I can find no fault/NTI in this! Amazing!TawnyBracken (talk) 02:02, December 27, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Tawny, please only comment critiques about the artwork. You can't just say "nice job" and leave. Anyway, the brown looks too black on the face. Or maybe that's just shading. Either way, can you please lighten it? 02:07, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Tawny 17:30, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job! Is there meant to be earpink on the --> ear? If so, I cannot see it (probably not supposed to O.o) also, the light source of the tail doesn't match the rest of the body.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:36, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks!There aren't earpink there 22:11, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front leg?<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:43, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups 15:53, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Birdwing(Q) ~ CBA


Pretty! The shading looks paintbrushy (is that a word?)<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  01:38, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't quite sure what to do so I lightened the shading a few ticks and tried to smooth it out a little though it probably didn't help much

Smoothen out the shading at the top of the shoulder of the <--- leg, where it meets the side of the face. :) 23:29, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The shading on the main body still looks a little paintbrushy.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:44, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Still not sure what paintbrushy means? That's literally as much as I will smooth it out, as I can point out several other approved images with rougher shading in a similar style to this.

I don't think the shading looks paintbrushy or rough, it's good. CBA? 00:49, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Clovertail (E) ~ For Approval
Wait should I put 'For Approval' since my first one got approved? 02:40, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah you can. And, the white isn't supposed to be on the chest at all - only on the legs. Her other images were tweaked for that awhile back, actually. Nice image^^

'''Redone. '''Thanks! 02:59, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit. 03:19, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

'''Redone. 03:22, December 28, 2016 (UTC)'''

The shadin on the back hip looks (for the lack of a better word) odd...it basically makes the tail look bigger than it really is. If that makes sense. 04:02, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Redone 04:05, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

The shading all around is very blotchy and flat. Maybe add a second layer, and name it something (Appledash never names her layers, but I name all of them myself, usually use something like “shading2” or “depth”) and go over the parts that are darker? Try looking at some other chararts too. --

Redone I added two more layers of shading. And smudged it so it looks like fur. :) 04:26, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Blur the white some more.<font color="#0F52BA" face="Segoe">Stealth <font color="#FF0000" face="Segoe">f🔥re <font color="#0067A5" face="Teen">❤Warriors Forever!❤  00:45, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 02:32, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the earpink a little?

'''Redone. ''' 00:36, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly make the shading a bit less patchy?^^

Redone. There it goes. :) 16:13, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I feel like for the shading placement you have here, there needs to be shading on the chest, like how it is on Frostfur's elder image, which I think best fits the pattern you are trying to replicate. ^^ 03:59, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. '''I am not good at doing my own shading placement, so I usually copy off the apprentice tutorial shading tutorial. ^^ 22:22, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

There's nothing wrong with that. ^^ But it's always good to experiment and create your own style. Maybe not right now, but maybe when you're more confident of your abilities. Anyway, darken the shading. 22:46, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 22:52, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more, I can't really see it. I also think the earpink could use a bit of definition, too. 00:54, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

'''Redone. ''' 20:10, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Cloudmist (Lo) ~ For Evaluation
First charart! Hopefully this goes well. The turtorials were really useful. Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job for your first one! Smudge the shading and lighten it a bit though. 04:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded (thank you! :) ) - Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:06, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if you're aware, but her base on the apprentice image is pure white. I can't tell because the brightness on my desktop is lowered right now.

There are some sharp white pixels on the <--- front leg (where it meets the rest of the body) and on the other front leg towards the shoulder. Probably just missing some shading there. :P 19:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded My screen was at max brightness, but lowered it now and managed to find the white spots. It still looks sorta white to me, but I tried to pale the shading to hopefully make it look less gray if it did. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the image, for instance the belly? — ☆ ﻿paper  ·  finches  ★  14:38, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light a bit on the legs and tail. 00:51, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure about the depth Shadowbright67 (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

Carpkit (Star) ~ For Approval
All colors from kit image. Comments? 00:38, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading just a tad, particularly on the main body and tail? 00:50, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:57, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on the front body still looks undefined. Try adding some depth.

Reuploaded. 20:19, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (Lo) - CBA
First loner image. 01:56, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?

Pricklekit (RC) Star - Withdrawn
02:27, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

He needs to be long-furred, as all RiverClan cats get long fur unless stated otherwise. Also, define the shading. 02:32, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Would I have to restart or is there a way to make it long furred?

You will have to restart, as there is a whole other pixel for it. 03:12, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

There is an apprentice tutorial here that you could try. Or just redo it. It's up to you. 03:15, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Withdrawing for now! Computer problems and I'm sick. 20:22, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I'll take over, if that's alright. <span style="">23:32, 01/2/2017

Wavepaw (A) - For Approval
she's waving buh-bye to 2016 too 03:11, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Thank god this terrible year is over. Define the light on the back paws. 02:19, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 16:38, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear. 03:34, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a little bit? 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Piketooth (Star) ~ For Approval
don't have the file anymore but it's not a complicated pattern so w/e 11:58, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't seem as pink as on the warrior image. It looks nice. :D Jayie  Just yo u wait~ 21:44, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded 14:48, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

There are some specks of waste around his tail. - <font style="background:yellow">Jose1106   Ready for ANYTHING!  02:14, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded 20:08, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) - For Approval
~Patch   feather~   15:18, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just me, but I don't think the tint of the brown matches the other images. It seems a bit too...dark. 01:20, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think there should just be a little more marks with a slight lighter shade so it's a bit like a gradient effect? (what am I even

Re-uploaded I can't tell if it looks any lighter. I used a much lighter brown though. ~Patch   feather~   16:48, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Would you like the file? The pattern doesn't seem to match correctly, as Sunjaw did it a certain way. <span style="">14:59, 1/03/2017

Perhaps add more speckles on the underside of the tail, as the other images seem to have a few more there

Re-uploaded Yeah, I think the file might help. ~Patch   feather~   14:22, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (SHA) (A) ~ For Approval
This is a pretty pattern  <span style="">14:33 Mon Jan 2 

Smudge/Blur the shading a bit more. 18:06, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Cricketkit (Star) ~ For Approval
Completely forgotten how to charart >_>

eyes should be orange. 14:26, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups how did I miss that

Remove the white, as she's only stated to have a white hind leg. 18:04, January 5, 2017 (UTC)