Warriors Wiki talk:Books

Rising Storm/Chapter 9 ~ Silver Nomination
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idk, but the main quote doens't seem to fit that well imo. You can keep it if you want though. Also, I don't think that the important events section should be listed, as it is not even that important since it's not revealed in that chapter that Cloudpaw took food; he only wailed at the twoleg nest door. 03:52 Sun Mar 13

Fixed Imo all the quotes in that chapter don't really stand out to me anyways, so I just picked another even though I'm not so sure about it...

Remember that we don't need a main quote for every single subpage. If you can't find one that describes the event in the chapter don't put a quote. 00:37, March 17, 2016 (UTC)

Are you going to remove it or do you want to keep it? 01:25, March 19, 2016 (UTC)

^^Removed it.

Comments before vote? 22:55, March 21, 2016 (UTC)

In the second paragraph, to should be spelled as too. In the fourth paragraph, the word that is misspelled. The first sentence from the fifth paragraph also needs a comma.

Fixed Although I didn't find the word that misspelled, and it is grammatically correct to leave the sentence without a comma and it would actually sound choppier with it.

Comments before vote? ? 00:04, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Starlight/Chapter 8 ~ Silver Nomination
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This sentence here should have "is" changed to "was" as it is past tense.

She shivers at the sight of the dead body, and thinks about how this ceremony is usually held at night, when the body isn't so visible.

The next sentence should have the word "to" added to it:

They are all exhausted, and it is clear that Mudclaw, the former deputy would like use the opportunity to make trouble.

The last two paragraphs also need a space.

UpdatedChapter Subpages aren't meant to be in past-tense by the way. I honestly can't see where a to would fit into the sentence above, and since you didn't tell me I'm leaving it as is.

Comments before vote? 00:04, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Dawn/Chapter 3 ~ Silver Nomination
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In the fifth paragraph, Squirrelpaw doesn't back up toward the clearing, she is still by the rock. In the next paragraph, put a dash between dark and colored.

The sentence here needs a comma: With sympathy in her eyes, Cinderpelt explains that Leafpaw was caught in a Twoleg trap, as traps were being set for the cats, and that Sorreltail witnessed everything but could do nothing to help.

This sentence here has surprised misspelled and also needs two dashes: Squirrelpaw isn't surprisd by Cinderpelt's reaction, as cats don't trust the generally bad-tempered black and white creatures.

Fixed Although I didn't put a comma where you suggested, as it is grammatically correct as is.

Comments before vote? 00:05, March 27, 2016 (UTC)

Sunrise/Chapter 6 ~ Silver Nomination
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The Ultimate Guide/Crookedstar Speaks ~ Silver Nomination
Okay, don't ask me to put a quote on this because there aren't any and I didn't put quotes on any of the other TUG intros I did that are just like this one.

Sunrise/Chapter 7 ~ Silver Nomination
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The Forgotten Warrior/Chapter 3 ~ Silver Nomination
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