Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Tawnyspots(W) - Redone
None of the images matched. OA was Stoney. I based it off of this image, so I'm pretty sure it's natural. Comments? 01:00, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the stripes a bit and maybe add some more? 01:20, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

give em' a smudge too; they look a bit paintbrushed on 04:22, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think they need to be smudged. That's not what makes them look paintbrushy. Just point the tips more, kind of like on the elder image, rather than having them so round and you should be fine. Also define the shading, especially on the shoulder. Nice job Ducksauce ouo I swear I will never typo that again   06:48, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe blur or smudge the pale chest into the pelt more so it looks more natural? (or something) 22:58, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this?

Sorry, re-uploaded, I tried. x.x I see the eyes, I'll change them next upload. x3 22:42, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the tips of the stripes. owo 07:43 Fri Nov 9

Doesn't really need to be smudged, it's not on the other images. Just taper them at the end. And I'd suggest a light source change, though optional. It's a pain in the butt to get this light source to work with cats that have pale areas. I know, I've tried. x.x Would probably be easier for you if you changed the light source. But like I said, entirely optional, it's up to you. 23:28, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Duck? 03:52, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudberry (W) ~ Tweaked
Just defined the shading on her tail and legs, though changes aren't showing. OA was Bluestar1776 with a tweak(?) made by Stoneh. o3o 22:38, November 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the areas you defined, and maybe add highlights. But define, we didn't mean darken, we meant make it more visible. It's still not very visible. 07:45, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah, sorry about that. I had a derp moment e.e I added highlights and lightened the areas I defined. 15:41, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (A) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked shading. Comments? 18:23, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the far side of the face just a bit (For both images.) 20:48, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

Shelly, please rejoin or these will end up being declined. Define the white specks in the eyes. 23:15, November 9, 2012 (UTC)

I already told you yes, Paleclaw. It's your problem if you didn't add me yet. Non-members aren't allowed to do that I recall. I'll reupload tonight. 19:43, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

She means you need to post a rejoin request. ._. It'll take five seconds. We can't read minds, you know.

Re-uploaded. There, I posted a request. And you guys don't have to be mindreaders, you jut actually have to read what I write. 20:01, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's no need to be so short; it's just the normal procedure. Could you blur the haunch shading a tad and define it lower down on the closer hindleg? 05:04, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Rippleclaw (W) ~ Redone
OA is Iceheart. So yeah... Not entirely sure what I should have done with this one...since the other pattern wasn't the most realistic, and the spots shouldn't have been on the image.

This is lovely how it is now. Could you define the shading a tad on the neck and tail and blur it on the back of the shoulder? 04:29, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Breezey. 8D

Dark Whiskers (SC) ~ Redone
A Sharpclaw asdfgghj OA was Shaf Girl and redone for shading issues. 23:13, November 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Dude, this is sexy. .o.

Re-uploaded. Ha as if this was a 10 minute job 05:05, November 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (W) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes. OA was Oblivion. Comments? 03:50, 13, 11, 2012

Define the shading, if you don't mind?

Re-uploaded 04:01, 13, 11, 2012