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Sorrelstripe (Q) - For Evaluation
So much thanks to my wonderful friend, who has the best Warriors art! She taught me shading, and everything about chararts. :D Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:36, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

You'll need to upload the file under what I've linked above.  Ellie  life is an illusion 14:59, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystie  Can't help loving me  15:13, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Don't thumb your images in the future! This is also the wrong size for the queen blank. Right click the longhair queen on the main page and click "See full size image" Then save it and put your image there. Lineart is missing on the ears and nose. It doesn't apppear you are using layers, when you should because it is so much easier using them. See their benefits in the Apprentice Tutorials. Can you define and blur/smudge the shading (after you define it of course). Good work! 15:26, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Please add a date for this onto the reservation table. 22:04, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

Oof Potato, I did use layers! :P Maybe it's because I changed laptops by doing it...? Anyway thanks!! I better draw another one tho :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  03:40, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  Crystie  Can't help loving me  14:44, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Remember, don't thumb your images! Simply go into Source Mode and remove the |left. In order to avoid a thumb just go to File:Sorrelstripe.queen.png and click "Upload a new version of this file". The image is not showing up, can you reupload again? 15:36, April 21, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maybe I need more shading? :P  Crystie  Can't help loving me  10:27, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading, if you're using a tint set it on multiply. --

10:37, 4/22/2019 Sorry for the double comment but the lineart from the eyes and tail are missing/blurry --

10:38, 4/22/2019l1

Define the eye depth. 12:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't repeat comments. This needs to match the apprentice image. 15:56, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploade  Crystie  Can't help loving me  23:25, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

Shading still needs to be defined, you have waste outside the raised front leg. You also have a unfilled pixel on > this cheek. 23:47, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

I've darkened it to match the apprentice :3 Reuploaded Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Monotype Corsiva,serif">Can't help loving me  09:54, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice's eyes are a lighter shade of blue. Could you smooth the shading on the flank too? 12:31, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart everywhere. I think this is a result of Gaussian Blur.. would you mind filling up those areas with shading? 23:28, April 23, 2019 (UTC)

Also define your lightsource- the front legs and > that back leg suggest the light hits < here, while the back shading suggests otherwise.

Reuploaded. I like the eye color of the apprentice pic more oof :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  13:19, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

What are the lighter blotches on her? Are those highlights? If so, tone them down (on the opacity bar). Define your light source- where is the light coming from? The pupils appear to be inconsistent in color- one eye has a darker black than the other. Shading is still leaking in some places. Don't worry! I struggle with that as well. Fill those blank areas with shading- I can provide a redline if you want. Smooth out the shading everywhere- just smooth out the edges with the blur or smudge tool, Gaussian Blur makes shading leak away, only use it if you want a really good shading gradient. You have unfilled pixels on > this side of the tail. Sorry for the wall of text! You're doing good so far! 22:13, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Aww, thanks Potato! <3 And thank you so much for the redline if you can provide!!! I feel so foolish… <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:26, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Here. Red= fill in/add shading. Blue= Remove shading to fit your light source. Green=Waste. Delete that. Yellow= missing/light pixels. Magenta= blur/smudge and tone down the highlights. Hope this helps! (if I mess up on the source sorry if I do). 22:31, April 26, 2019 (UTC)

Aww thank you Potato!! <3 Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  03:40, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm it doesn't appear you did what I said. Did you reupload the right file? The only difference I see is that the highlight blotches are set to a higher opacity.. I meant to lower them, then blur/smudge. If you need any more help, let me know! 03:51, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Oof... maybe it's the .mpd file, I guess? :P Anyway :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  05:57, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

What is that on her belly? If that's shading depth you need to lighten it and blur/smudge it. Lighten the highlight spots on her legs more and then blur/smudge them. Smooth out the shading and make >> this pupil darker to match <<this pupil. Let me know if you need to elaborate! 13:20, April 27, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded! :D School's so busy these days :P <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:46, April 30, 2019 (UTC)

There's a bit of brown in her eye and smooth the shading on her face.

Highlights are making her turn gray in some areas- if you haven't set them to overlay, you should as I think that should help. 01:35, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail please. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:08, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 0px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:Comic Sans MS,serif">loving me  11:47, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

The tips of her front paws are missing some color and her bottom is too. Her forehead has a dark smudge, I don't know if it's shading or part of her or a mistake.

17:15, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

It's shading :P Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  06:54, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

There's Gray littered about her, smooth shading on stomach, shoulder and on her forehead. Her set looks like it has a faint, paintbrushy texture. This also looks like it might be a bit of a different color than her set. This looks even sort of red. The texture is most notable on the warrior and can be found on File:Sorrelstripe.warrior.png <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 16:11, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The eyes appear to be two seperate colors, one is more brownish than the other (>>> this one). 17:37, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh it's the first now! :O Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  12:58, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

The base is inconsistent on the tail, and the texture looks green. Draw 1-2px lines and smudge them in the direction of the fur. 13:01, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

The shading on the backlegs should be smoothed

12:38, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  12:07, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

Define the texture. 22:05, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the tail and darken it only a little bit.

01:31, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  03:37, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

define the texture a bit more? i still cant see it.

04:00, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

I think you should check for leaking shading, I see it in a lot of places. If you need a redline, just ask! 01:51, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh Potato please give me one :P <3 <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(midnightblue,mediumpurple);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:papyrus,serif;text-shadow:midnightblue 5px 3px 3px"> Crystie  <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,midnightblue,violet);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">Can't help <span style="background:-webkit-linear-gradient(right,hotpink,honeydew,lightblue);-webkit-background-clip:text;-webkit-text-fill-color:transparent;font-family:comic sans ms,serif">loving me  11:53, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Here. 13:38, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Light Colored TC Kit - For Approval
cute <span style="">04:52 Wed May 1

could you smooth the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:12, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">19:54 Wed May 1

Can you define the light source? And I don't think the shading by the eye should be there, or it should at least be reduced. -- 22:41, May 1, 2019 (UTC)

Since this is from a manga, shouldn't it be grayscale and have the texture removed? 19:54, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

You are right, Bluestar. Cam you smooth out the shading more? 22:31, May 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">05:48 Fri May 3

Optional, but maybe the lighten the shading a few ticks? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:15, May 3, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">16:59 Fri May 3

Where's the source coming from? With how it's on the face and haunch it seems to suggest < way, but if it were so I don't think shading on the backside/ > side of the tail base is needed

reuploaded i redid the shading but i'm envisioning the light source coming in directly from her side, like how we are looking at her <span style="">04:31 Wed May 8

I think the haunch and tail shading could afford to be smoothed out a bit. Juniperbriar (talk) 00:34, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded <span style="">02:52 Sun May 12

Dawncloud (E) ~ CBA
wassup

Sharpen the stripes and there should be more on the back/sides. <span style="">18:25 Thu May 2 2019

Still working, Star?

re-up stripes are my nemesis

CBA?

Small tabby kit (Ki)- For Approval
Comments? 21:33, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste at the tip of the ear closest to us. And if you can, smooth out the tabby stripes.

21:43, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the forelegs. If you're going for a pointed tabby look, I'd add more stripes to the face and lessen them a bit on the hip 21:53, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded baby kitty  22:11, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading a lot, I cant see it at all <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:50, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  04:15, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing a change? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:52, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

i can see the change, the shading is much more defined. could you smooth it out on the head and the shoulder area? and perhaps expand it more on the tail? i love the stripes!

Could you darken the shading more? The tint itself is a bit too light (That's most likely the issue) perhaps darken the tint to a much darker purple. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 07:57, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:56, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and ears? 13:43, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  00:02, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? I like this and it's nice to see you improve :) 01:41, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry, but could you add/define the facial shading and fix the leaking on the leg? and smooth out the shading everywhere

There's also waste in front of the muzzle. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  10:57, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:44, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

There is still some waste outside the muzzle. Could you taper the end of the large stripe on the haunch? 23:51, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded volcano stripeee ftw  00:03, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

can you connect the mid-section shading to the lineart of the tail and haunch? <span style="">02:54 Sun May 12

I'm basing this off of Baykit's source, and the shading there isn't connected the way you are telling me to. 03:00, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

yeah but it looks like a halo of light is coming off from the tip of the tail. I understand the light source, but to me it looks like leaking shading. another opinion would be cool <span style="">03:35 Sun May 12

Uh, your tail has leaking shading on the top. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:53, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Please give me a redline, Splook. I'm still very confused as to what you're talking about. 13:41, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Bird (E) ~ For Approval
23:03, 5/4/19

Wow! This is amazing! Can you desaturate the earpink? It's really bright and neon. 23:24, May 4, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded thank you! 23:48, 5/4/19

This is really good. Could you make the booty stripes lessen, her other images (File:Bird.loner.png) don't seem to have much there. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:55, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

could you define shading depth on the head just a tad?

reuploaded 14:37, 5/5/19

I'm gonna bump ya up to an apprentice, since you clearly know what you're doing. ^^ You can use "for approval" from now on. 00:19, May 6, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Terribly sorry for breaking the CBA, but is there any way you could possibly dull the highlights or reduce the "shiny" bits? It's throwing off the coloring and making it look a tad lighter than her rogue and original CG style, both of whom bear the master pattern due to their creator having designed it. ​

reuploaded hopefully the change is noticeable enough, let me know if i should fix it again. 21:36, 5/7/19

I'm not seeing any changes in the file history. It's probably a glitch with Wikia, but could you reupload again and see what it does? ​

reuploaded changes are here if they still aren't showing up. 18:50, 5/8/19

Could you dull the highlights a bit more? Still looks lighter than the other images imo 15:05, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

OS-3 elder 1 ~ For Evaluation
my first PCA image, I'm still learning Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:29, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

You need to have the heading be OS-3 elder 1- For Evaluation, since you are a kit in the project at the moment. Did you upload the right file? There's a redlink showing. 16:36, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for double commenting, but can you remove the waste around the elder? What I do is I use the lasso tool on the program I use and circle everywhere where there's darkness and hit delete. You can also use the magic wand tool, go to your transparent layer, select outside of the lineart, and go back to your base/shading layers and hit delete. 16:53, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded!Moonwolf15 (talk) 16:59, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink could use a lot of blurring/smudging at the edges. Define the shading on the face and ears, and define the shading depth. To do that, add a thinner, darker layer of shading. Can you give some variation to the stripes so they're not just facing the same direction and have the same width? Lastly, the stripes on the neck and back border on being a triangle tabby- a pattern that was ruled out for being unrealistic. I'd reccomend to make them more like the other stripes. If you need me to elaborate, let me know! 17:35, May 5, 2019 (UTC)

The back/neck stripes look fine, but the one stripe on the shoulder connecting to the head does look out of place. I can redline if need be. Also the shading needs to be defined everywhere. r hearts  <span style="style" title="will i ever be more than i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' ve always been" data-rte-attribs=" style title=will i ever be more than i've always been"&gt;waving through <span style="style" title="cuz i&lt;span data-rte-entity=">' m tap, tap, tappin on the glass" data-rte-attribs=" style title=cuz i'm tap, tap, tappin on the glass"&gt;a window <22:57, 5/05/2019> ​

this needs to be short-furred since they're windclan

Moonyy might be wrong and right. Thistleheart was WindClan and she had long fur. Can you darken the shading a tad?

windclan cats have to be short-furred unless specified otherwise, Thistlehesrt was specified to be long haired 16:25, May 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

You still have some time left, but are you still working? 15:08, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

Darken the shading everywhere more.. 16:14, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

You forgot to sign your comment. Crop the image a tad? There's a tad too much space on << this side. -- 17:13, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

The earpink in the ear closest to us should cover more of the ear as well. -- 01:52, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the belly shading some and connect it to the bottom lineart. <span style="">02:54 Sun May 12

Applepaw (K) - CBA
01:09, May 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The ear pink appears lighter on the apprentice. 01:49, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded  02:05, May 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading everywhere. 02:22, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

do you want the file? id also say shes supposed to be less striped and more of a mottled tabby. her entire body should be mottled and her legs+tail are the only places that should be striped 02:45, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

if you don’t mind ^^ 02:54, May 7, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded now more based on burntclaw's image 22:36, May 8, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? Looks very nice! 13:44, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

I think the apprentice colors look lighter than what you have here.

it is directly colorpicked from the apprentice psd. it might be the shading, i’ll lower the opacity when i get home 15:13, May 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded also thank you patchfeather ^^ 23:06, May 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Re-CBA? 13:26, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Wiry brown tom (DF) - For Approval
I like how this came out. Based off a seal sepia cat. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:25, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

i like this design! can you define the earpink? 22:44, 5/7/19

Define the shading? 22:55, May 7, 2019 (UTC)

Shading is very present, if a bit  leaking on the stomach, needs no defining Malina457 (talk) 23:22, May 7, 2019 (UTC)malina

Will define the earpink, but the light part on the stomach is actually supposed to be bounce light. I'll change the color of it. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:35, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

You don't need to change the bounce light; Mistystar's apprentice has it as well, so I think you'll be good. ​​​​

Still working on it but I have no internet at home, they should come to fix it on the 13th hopefully, so I may be able to post then or on the 14th. Right now Im using school wifi. It sucks cause I can edit the picture but I just cant upload it from my computer without wifi - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  10:54, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Spoke too soon, it fixed itself today. But it may got out again so it isn't for sure - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:54, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the stomach?

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:44, May 11, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the shading is too...black, in a sense? It looks like a brown and black cat imo. Maybe set the shading layer to multiply so you can see through it, or maybe lower the opacity? 13:25, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lowered the opacity since it was already on multiply. It may look black since the legs, tail, and face are dark brown, and with the blue-green shading they look darker. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  16:46, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Seedpelt (MV) (E) - Declined
06:11, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

So there's a bit of a mix-up with this. We had to split the Seedpelt pages again, I think, and this Seedpelt is only a warrior, not an elder...since we don't know for sure that the Seedpelt in PC is also the Seedpelt from MV.

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Pebble Heart (Alt. K) - Declined
he's gonna be hot when he grows up, even if he is a mistake 06:11, May 8, 2019 (UTC)

I think this already exists but needs to be redone with the kit blanks come June. ​

Have to wait until the redos, sorry

Cinnamontail (W) - CBA
Cinnamon toast crunch cat

Lovely :O define the shading? Malina457 (talk) 17:14, May 9, 2019 (UTC)malina

I think it should be defined on the brown only, as I can see it on the white. 22:06, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

I disagree, it could be defined overall <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 23:18, May 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think it'd be easier to define the light on the paws, rather than the shading (but to my eye, the shading is fine everywhere, you can tell its there and it doesn't need to be high contrast).

reup just darkened it a bit + paws  00:06, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

cba?

Needlepaw (SkC) (K) - CBA
baeby

Can you smoothen that stomach shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:38, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the bottom of the hind leg, right above the tail. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:50, May 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

this is so cute!!! maybe smooth the shading on the neck a little? this is very nice ^^ 23:07, May 10, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

reuploaded thank you!

CBA?

Green-eyed rogue (Ro) ~ Withdrawn?
wasn't sure if i was allowed to do it with no desc, but this cat doesn't have a description and has a charart so hopefully i'm allowed to do this? feel free to decline if not

This would not get a charart, as it doesn't have a description, it just says scrawny and green eyes. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:15, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

idk if i'm allowed to withdraw minutes after uploading but i'm unsure about this lol sorry for spamming the approval page

I think you can withdrawn it. It was a nice charart, though. 03:52, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Tiny black kit (Ki) - For Approval
The only kit of Nutmeg's (SkyClan's Destiny) who has a description. 17:47, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

This is really good! Define the shading depth.

18:09, May 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 18:41, May 12, 2019 (UTC)