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Smokefoot (E) ~ CBA
Shading is hard.

01:26, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to say this, but define it more. I have to zoom in close to see it. I also think there's an unfilled pixel on the tail? 01:43, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Can you add depth to the ear pink? It seems a bit flat.  Ellie  life is an illusion 03:35, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

06:06, March 31, 2019 (UTC)

Shading could still use defining

Reuploaded

19:44, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading. 22:09, April 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

03:03, April 2, 2019 (UTC)

hm the shading could still use some defining. try darkening it and then using a 40 opacity eraser tool to erase the edges? 05:18, April 3, 2019 (UTC)

Updated.

02:44, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Add some more shading along the bottom of the face and the ears. There's also leaking shading on the front elbow area. You're doing great! :) 21:54, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Vec, I think I got it? I'm just terrible with shading lmao.

22:51, April 4, 2019 (UTC)

waste behind the head

smoothshading out Willowstep12 (talk) 17:21, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fixed

18:29, April 5, 2019 (UTC)

Hmm, given the source, there wouldn't be any shading on the front of the chest; rather, it'd be on the < side. I also believe the haunch shading should be receded and rounded out a bit.

Better?

19:02, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

hmm maybe could you smooth the shading on the haunch to shoulder place? it seems a little hard --

13:57, 4/07/2019

Looks fine to me? Might be my screen though.

00:03, April 8, 2019 (UTC)

should add some shading to the chest area, close to the front leg if you get what I mean

i agree that it needs to be smoothed out– especially on the shoulder and the haunch. 13:16, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded If that doesn't work then I may need some recommendations.

19:53, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

You have some darker black pixels in the shading. Here are three things to help with smoothing the shading out:

1. Run the blur tool at a rate of 10px 100% strength

2. 10px smudge tool at 40% strength

3. Only if you're desperate, use Gaussian Blur at 1.0 several times  22:28, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

You can also smooth with the smudge tool.  Ellie  life is an illusion 06:18, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Believe it looks a bit better.

17:18, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could still be smoothed a lot on the flank and haunch. 12:42, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded

01:59, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 22:23, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Silver Frost (E) ~ For Approval
pretty kitty 00:59, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light in the ear closest to us. 01:19, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:43, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

I'm assuming your light source is heading < that way towards the cat, so remove the shading on --> side of the shoulder/forearm area, and ---> side of the haunch. 02:32, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a little bit, please. ​​​​

Reuploaded 23:15, April 6, 2019 (UTC)

define shading a little bit more on the ear furthest from us? --

13:52, 4/07/2019

Hm. Vec's comment doesn't seem to have been addressed - the light source is contradictory as is. To most easily remedy what's there, the shading on the > side of the arm and the > side of the haunch, and any shading along the back that's further than the shoulder would need to be removed. Then, the shading'd be expanded to the tail tip, belly, < side of the chest, < side of the visible arm, along the backside of the cat and some reaching to the chin.

Reuploaded Spooky is shading all you're allowed to comment on? 01:47, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Uncalled for bro Malina457 (talk) 03:04, April 10, 2019 (UTC)malina

What seems to be the issue here? Spooky was just making a statement that Vec's comment hadn't been addressed; there's nothing wrong with that. ​​​

Lawl. Anyways, that did get most of it, but - expand it on the belly, add more light on the fully white front paw/lower leg (there's also some leaking from the top leg to the one beneath), it needs to be expanded > way on the haunch, and the tail tip shading cuts off rather abruptly, which looks a bit awkward.

Reuploaded it's official you can only comment on shading. 03:13, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

That was quite rude to call Spooky that all they can comment on is shading. Considering the light source, I think the haunch could be in shadow. --

10:56, 4/13/2019

Yep^^ I've seen Spooky comment on many other topics before, not just shading. Anyways, smooth out the shading on the belly. 14:26, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

I think there's some missing lineart on the <-- ear. Mind checking up on that? 15:08, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not sure how I was being rude... Also I have no idea what happened w/ the lineart but it's fine now. weird... 02:53, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Oh god, I'm sorry I said the wrong thing I meant the back fhgdfg im really sorry, you can erase the shading on the haunch --

03:42, 4/14/2019

@ Warriorcat, Spooky explained that it was a joke. I didn't know that you and her have known each other for a while now, and it was a friendly jab. Apologies, and you're not in any trouble. ​​​​​

Still working?

17:56, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (L) - For Approval
The Queen ugh this pattern 20:58 Tue Apr 9

Can you add her torn ear? 21:00, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I think this might be a Wikia thing, but her eyes seem lighter than her other images? Also, I love the bushy tail, it makes me happy.

Maybe smooth out the shading on the <-- front leg? It looks really sharp compared to the rest of the shading. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:05, April 9, 2019 (UTC)

I took the eye color from the deputy that tail gives me life 21:52 Tue Apr 9

I believe she needs a torn eartip? Maybe I'm wrong though.

01:58, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

I agree that the eyes look darker on her other images

Reuploaded Then the eyes need darkened on the deputy. I may also mess with the tail to make it bushier. 14:38 Wed Apr 10

Could you smooth the shading on the white paw? Looks a lot more sharp there than elsewhere

I agree the tail needs to be bushier

Reuploaded This is handdrawn shading not texture. And she does have the white paw, her floof just covers a lot of it 17:32 Fri Apr 12

can you define the shading on the body a little bit? 22:30 Fri Apr 12

can you thicken the linearart on the tail? 01:24, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the tail/body shading just a bit?  Ellie  life is an illusion 02:23, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the ear shading. It's very sharp compared to the other bits 'n pieces of shading. 16:50, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Just letting the leads know, I have an exam this Wednesday I need to finish studying for. I plan on uploading tomorrow but in case I don't do it til Thursday that is why. 22:57 Mon Apr 15

Kitepaw (A) - For Approval


07:22, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Lessen the earpink in the ear closest to us. Add/define the shading and I don't think reddish brown cats get parts? Pinestar and Oakheart don't have pale parts. 13:05, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Recently we allowed pale parts on several approved images. (OS-1 gray queen and OS-4 >i think< silver queen come into mind)

You are only allowed to do one "new" image at this time. Please either withdraw the black kit or this will be declined. 17:30, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Pale parts can be added yes, but they shouldn't be so prominent if not specified; in this case, as is, it contradicts the cite by making him a bicolor with two distinct shades. The other instances were less so of a difference, either in color or placement.

I removed the black kit, so I'm not doing it anymore.

06:56, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Nice so far^^ I added the date you reserved this on the table, remember to do that in the future! Not sure if it's just me, but the shading looks like it's leaking a little on the chest. 23:32, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

there's some waste around the image

You still have time, but are you still working? 12:44, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

gray warrior- for evauation
i know theirs no shading going to add it laterWillowstep12 (talk) 13:53, April 10, 2019 (UTC) reuploaded  added the shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:42, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try! But can you desaturate the ear and nosepink? It's very neon as is, you should add some darker and lighter shades to the eye for gradient, the shading need darkening, and heavy expansion. Squidward Plays All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:06, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded is the earpink desaturated anoghtWillowstep12 (talk) 15:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Define/add shading and define your light source. I can't tell if there is shading. <span style="">16:24 Wed Apr 10

reuploadedWillowstep12 (talk) 17:24, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the earpink, and add shading to the back foot closest to us. Connect the shading on the front leg closest to us. There should be more shading depth to the image. 21:36, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

The shading could also use some smoothing, and shading on the tail either needs to be added or defined, I believe. I think the current earpink darkness is alright, but it could use some desaturation to dull it. Juniperbriar (talk) 21:54, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded smoothed shadingWillowstep12 (talk) 14:50, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Shading needs to be smoothed more and the depth needs to be defined, all over. Define it especially on the back paws and tail. Line art appears to be blurred by the tail and front paw closest to us. Could you possibly desaturate the earpink and nose a little too? I think a paler pink would complement the gray better. 18:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

i wont be active for a week so please dont reject thisWillowstep12 (talk) 19:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Flutterkit (Ki) - For Approval
hi this is my warrior cats son <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:39, April 10, 2019 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, as all WindClan cats are given short fur unless stated otherwise. 00:55, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

reups didn't even know that was a rule but whatever. i liked it better long but its not like im allowed to argue <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:24, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, that's a rule we put into effect a couple years ago based on statements in the series. Given you're not super active, it's not all that much of a shock that you didn't know. There's no need to be as harsh as you were, though. ​​​​

Brighten up the white. 01:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Dull down the earpink slightly Malina457 (talk) 18:09, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina

reups sorry took me a bit to reup was busy. i tried but dont really know if I succeeded.. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:35, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Is it just me or does he look green?

it doesn't look green to me. could you define the light on the tail and paws?

idk from my screen he does look a little bit green as well 11:36, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

it looks like a green shade as well. 15:43, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

He doesn't look green on my phone or PC, Moony said it didn't either but 3 people also say it's green.. I know that I made the base a warm brown and the shading is red I've no clue why it's looking green for some people.. Orr how to make it less green for those three people. I'll re-up for light on the paws/tail like Moony said tonight though and I'll see what I can do about this weird green thingy <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 15:50, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Try #290f01 for the brown. 16:48, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry Potato, but in all honesty I don't really like that shade of Brown and I'd rather try something else of my own choosing before I were to try that color. No offense I just don't really like it and I'd rather try a few things of my own choosing as the artist. ;; <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 17:39, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

reups i decided to redo the shading aswell, hopefully the new shading looks alright and hopefully the green is fixed? idk whats going on with the green but i tried. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:10, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

The image is not showing up. Can you link with changes? 23:24, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

wow, thats really weird. It showed fine when i did Desktop Preview while making the edit? Wikia what drugs you takin?? Hopefully it's fixed now. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 23:29, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

It's now showing up ;) 00:51, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth the edges of the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:00, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

reups i tried scrubbing him with the blur tool, idek if it made a difference. This is as smooth as ive been able to get it <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 01:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Please don't shoot me.. but he still looks green.. perhaps opt for a darker shade of brown..? *gets shot* 22:06, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Imo looks even greener now Malina457 (talk) 05:20, April 16, 2019 (UTC)malina

I guess I'll try to touch the Brown a bit again. I'm going to play with it slowly though. I want it to still look a certain way so I'm just gonna change it slowly until it starts looking less green for people and still looks good to me. But I'll actually also take a look at the shading again and just see if I can smooth it out anymore. I actually do want to try and smooth it on the brown. If I can. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:22, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

reups i actually kind of like this better <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 22:30, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Brighten the white everywhere except for the face. It looks really gray. 23:08, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw (App)- For Approval
Here he is! Comments? First time trying texture. I freaking love him and his parents. Also, will remove that waste in a moment. 01:41, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:46, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shading, define the eye depth and add some shine to them as well. The shading appears to be leaking from the shading and on the chest next to the leg line art. Lighten the earpink too, it looks super dark. It also looks like there's some waste by the head. 02:06, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll fix all these things tomorrow! Ah, I was suspicious something was bugging me. 02:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded will fix more stuffs tomorrow 02:23, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Also, if your light is coming from the front, there some be some light on the fronts of the forelegs and the chest 02:25, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Leaking shading by the belly and haunch, waste by the tail tip and shoulder/neck Malina457 (talk) 03:02, April 11, 2019 (UTC)malina

Try connecting the body texture to the hindleg texture. Right now the Hindleg texture just weirdly cuts off. (Something like this, excuse my sloppiness -> ) Tinystream (talk) 03:30, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

vary the texture slightly more so that it doesnt look as paintbrushy. i suggest using a smudge tool and running it in the direction of fur/drawing more texture lines. in addition, her color looks unrealistically saturated and slightly green. i suggest googling light ginger cats and color picking for a realistic base color 04:29, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Rootpaw should have shorthair lineart b/c it never said he had long fur--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:07, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

fur length is artist's choice when unstated. 09:12, April 11, 2019 (UTC) Understood--Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:33, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I colorpicked off Tree's MCA. Why does that look unrealistic? Malina, can you circle where? 13:05, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

IMO the image looks slightly green. Might be because of the texture/shading, but it could stand to be tweaked


 * I think it also has something to do with the black/blue based shading on top of yellow. I know shading tint is artist's choice but I think you'll have less problems if you used a darker orange or even red on top of yellow 16:47, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

I'll try to address all of your comments! I learned from reading an archive that red is a good shade for yellow cats (Gooseberry's queen I think). I'll reupload later. Also yep fur length is my choice, I made him to resemble his "weird" father. 22:03, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:39, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

There’s some waste by the tail and ears! On the edges of the image/canvas. -Shadow  It's a prosthetic  22:53, April 11, 2019 (UTC)

Around the ENTIRE tail. (my bold isnt working, sorry) Malina457 (talk) 00:14, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina

this is turning out better. you need to define the shading everywhere, and also smooth it out on the tail and the belly. it appears that the shading is leaking in some places, which is probably a result of abusing the blur tool. in this case i still highly recommend the smudge tool at 10-20 px to achieve the same effect as the blur tool, but better without the risk of having the shading leaking 00:28, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  01:25, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth shading on the backleg furthest from us --

03:36, 4/12/2019

Seems like the shading is leaking on the chest, legs and tail. also can you smooth out the shading on the legs and tail? the texture also needs to follow the fur flow. what you have here looks like it's crisscrossing

Reuploaded redid shading with a lot of smoothing out, will reup for waste in a momento 22:49, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste has been killed via lasso 22:57, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Can u define shading on the left side of it's face? Bluedragon64 (talk) 23:31, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any shading with my source there, I think. I'll check my reference image to see if I need to place some there though. 23:50, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

smooth out the shading everywhere/define the gradient. 01:11, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded also darkened the shading a bit. 01:40, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

it still needs smoothing out

Reuploaded oh StarClan halp the shading is icky now 02:39, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

not sure if you removed the texture but i can't really see it on my screen? also sorry to be a pain  perhaps the shading could be blurred/smudged/smoothed out more

I did remove the texture- I was struggling with it. I'll blur (and possibly redo) the shading again tomorrow. 05:17, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded waste will be gone in a jiffy 14:19, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  14:22, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, define the depth on the chest, and smooth it out slightly on the haunch 01:54, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

define the light on the tail

Reuploaded will remove waste later. 14:20, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:43, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

The edges of the shading should be smoothed and can youd define the texture? You said there was texture but I'm not seeing any at all? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:25, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I said I removed it- look under Moonyy's comment. 16:29, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll fix that haunch shading. 16:41, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded ahh much better *pats Rootpaw* 16:46, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and leg shading. ​​​​​

Reuploaded  18:19, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing where the shading has been smoothed out. Could you try smoothing the edges? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:57, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded  22:05, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Add some light on that front leg (the upper part) and smooth out the shading there

With the approval of Moss, you've been upgraded to an apprentice and this can now say "for approval" ^^ 13:22, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Shading seems to be leaking on the hind leg closest to us, and the front paw furthest away from us. Juniperbriar (talk) 13:45, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you smooth the shading a bit on the shoulder, tail, and front paw farthest from us? Dunno if it's just me, but the shading on the front of the body looks darker than the rest. could you either darken the rest of the shading to match that or lighten that area a little? Define the shading in the ears. 15:34, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Also needs blue eyes. 16:19, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Vec! I'll reup later. 22:14, April 16, 2019 (UTC) Wikia will not let me upload him, it doesn't say under the bottom of the file history "Upload a new version of this file". For now, look here for changes. 22:50, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded at last. 22:51, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Lightleap (W) ~ CBA
here's my first pixel lol Tybaxel (talk) 00:54, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Don't thumb your images! I fixed it for you. Define the shading, and your lightsource. Smudge the pale parts into her fur more. 00:58, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded my bad! Tybaxel (talk) 01:27, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Define the shading more. 01:42, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

From the looks of the kit, it doesn't have pale parts so i believe that should be removed. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:49, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

imo she looks a little crosseyed --

03:08, 4/12/2019

reuploaded fixed but i don't know how to define the shading anymore than i already have lol. also i did not see a kit sprite anywhere for her so i just made a design from scratch Tybaxel (talk) 11:20, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

this is his kit image: File:Lightkit.kit.png. correct me if im wrong, but i dont think it is mandatory to match it since it is not in use. 11:23, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

it still needs to match up to tigerstar. 11:26, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

match up to tigerstar? so should i color pick from tigerstar’s sprite? and remove the pale parts? to be fair the pale parts are really low opacity though. i just added them for realism. Tybaxel (talk) 11:20, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Remember to not thumb your images! Simply go to File:Lightleap.warrior.png and scroll down. Click "Upload a new version of this file" and insert the changes. Then come back here and indicate you reuploaded. That way there's no thumb. 13:06, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

imo it matches enough. he doesnt have to be 100% identical 13:25, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

This needs to match the kit since it matches Tigerstar and the kit didn't look as though it had pale parts, we can't add things to match realism if another in the set doesn't have it imo <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:54, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

but the kit sprite isn’t even in use. it’s outdated. it’s not going to be used anymore so i don’t see any reason to copy the old kit design...plus i think i made her look enough like tiger? it’s a dark brown tabby, not all of them will look identical :( if you really want me to i can make her identical Tybaxel (talk) 17:03, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

I think it matches closely enough, it looks just like Tigerstar Malina457 (talk) 17:37, April 12, 2019 (UTC)malina

It's a lovely image regardless, but if we made Tigerstar Sr and his tabby offspring have almost the exact stripes, and match all the colors for the other "a looks just like b" (Twig and Hawk, Sandy and Fin, etc), then I agree that this needs to match Tigerheart/star. Here the tail stripes are too thick, and the main stripes are too close together. 18:32, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

understandable.. i will wait for some more input though before i go in and change it since i am kind of proud of the stripes i already made lol Tybaxel (talk) 20:23, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

It isn't in use because the blanks were remade that doesn't mean we should throw that one away just because imo <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:41, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

I'm sure this could be used elsewhere, but current site policy does dictate that in cases where cats are said to be "identical"; they need to be... identical. The not-in-use image is a moot point at this point as article content cites always override artistic choices, so he has to match Tigerheart/star.

How is it moot? She was tweaked to match tigerstar.. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 20:51, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Having a not-in use image doesn't matter, when the book cites override to just say match directly. This should be matched directly to Tigerstar - now that the kit isn't in use, the artist can better match exactly to his pattern and placement. Saying they should match the kit isn't the best course of action as it differs from Tigerstar's set. While close, and while it was tweaked to match better, going straight to the source of the father's set, to accurately reflect the book cites, is what we should do to be the most true to the canon we have.

I could send you Tigerheartstar's leader file, if that would help. 22:31, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i've matched her colors and stripes to match to tigerstar's. let me know if anything else should be tweaked Tybaxel (talk) 23:26, April 12, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

can you define the depth of the shading? 05:51, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded i've defined the shading as much as i can :( it's hard to see it since her fur is already dark Tybaxel (talk) 16:33, April 13, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Can you add light to the front legs, even with this souece some light would still shine on them. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 16:23, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Tybaxel (talk) 18:49, April 14, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Could you add a bit more light to the front legs? 12:47, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on all legs except for the front leg farthest from us. 22:04, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded Tybaxel (talk) 00:26, April 16, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? You also appear to understand what you're doing so I'm going to move you up to an apprentice^^ 22:04, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Wrenkit (SC) (k) ~ CBA
baby --

03:07, 4/12/2019

can you define the eye color/depth? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:32, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Remove the shading on the back that's above the haunch; it wouldn't all be in shading given the source

add some shading to the bottom haunch too

Reups --

10:48, 4/13/2019

smooth out the haunch shading

Some depth could be added to the front body shading as well, the darkness between the back end and the front throw it off quite a bit. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:56, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --

11:35, 4/16/2019

CBA?

Stonepelt (e) ~ CBA
he wishes to be a cool kid --

03:45, 4/12/2019

There should be some stripes above the eyes I think. 18:24, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading at the base of the chest

Define the leg, ear, and face shading as well. 22:56, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

will reup later. i know therese waste --

10:41, 4/13/2019 reups --

10:51, 4/13/2019

It could still stand to be defined in those areas I mentioned by a tick more. It's still pretty hard to see. 12:39, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

I thinm its fine? I can see them just fine. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:55, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I think the facial shading could be defined a bit more, I'm having a hard time seeing it myself. ​​​​​

Reups --

11:37, 4/16/2019

CBA?

Woodpaw (App) - For Approval


Second attempt at doing a charart. Let's hope my files don't get deleted 04:48, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Don't thumb your images, or, in your case, have |left in the file. :) 05:15, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define your light source? (or at least the light on the face)? 05:32 Fri Apr 12 2019

Reuploaded - Tried to define the head light source a bit. I imagine that it's a setting sun glowing overhead, slightly setting down over it's rump. (If that makes sense)  06:05, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

I think the leg light coukd be defined more, can't really see it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:00, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Which leg, sorry? 06:05, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

All of them, imo. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:19, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

Still working?

I am. I need to redo it sometime tomorrow, though, as my art program crashed and killed all the files 13:16, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to fix shading. 10:17, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the chest and belly a tad? I love this ^^ Malina457 (talk) 15:37, April 17, 2019 (UTC)malina

Based on your light source I feel like there should be shading on the shoulder and the < side of the thigh. They look flat compared to the feet. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:36, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Pigeonfoot (W) ~ For Approval
ok uhm not sure about this one rip

23:38, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading depth some? <span style="">04:42 Sun Apr 14

Reuploaded

16:48, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the pupil? I'm having a hard time distinguishing it from the eye depth/gradience. 12:50, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

dull the highlights very slightly on the back; almost looks like a diff colored dorsal stripe

Reuploaded 22:18, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Fogkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tiny -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  23:42, April 12, 2019 (UTC)

define light more on the front paw near the tail, also the same comment spooky left on wrenkit. --

10:39, 4/13/2019

Reuploaded! -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  16:50, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

add more shading on the haunch? this looks perfect ^^ --

03:40, 4/14/2019

Could you darken the shading some too? Its really hard tok see it on the white. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:53, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! '''Aaa thank you  -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  17:08, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

May be controversial, but could you darken the tint some? While red is a perfectly acceptable tint, the contrast of the shaded and unshaded gray is very stark imo. 12:51, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded! ''' -Shadow   It's a prosthetic  00:07, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Applepaw (a) - CBA
this looked better in ps... when you zoomed in 400% of course 01:50, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the stripes? They look more like mottles atm. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 02:21, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

reup i tried. i was envisioning her to be some sort of spotted tabby 05:46, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

She needs to be short-furred, since she's a WindClan cat. 16:30, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste outside her tail, legs, and chest/stomach area. 19:13, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

reup 01:48, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a bit more by just a few ticks? 02:24, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

reup kind of revamped the shading 06:52, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

In all honesty, I think it could still use defining. Like the colors, though. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 11:39, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I agree, ould some depth be added to. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 15:54, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

reup man this is a pain to shade 01:13, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Breeze That Rustles the Leaves (TB) - For Approval
Tribe cats are best cats. And no, this is not a debate, let me rave about the Tribe. ​​​

I'm pretty sure tge earpink should be opposite of where its at by the way the ear is pulled back. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:04, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

shouldnt there be mud on the pelt? also iirc the earpink can be wherever the oa decides <span style="">00:18, 4/14/2019

can you smooth the body shading out some? <span style="">00:39 Sun Apr 14

Earpink is artist's choice, I think Jayce put it in a really nice spot! 00:47, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I honestly made the blank with no set ear pink placement in mind. ^^ And can you add some shading behind the <--- front leg on the belly? With your light source, I'd think there would be some. 02:19, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I knkw earpink is artist choice but I was going off the reference of the blanks and the way the ear itself is pointed. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:50, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face

Re-uploaded. Stole Snow's mud and changed the color, so I'd rather not add anymore. As per Vec, who designed the blanks, I'll be keeping the ear pink where it is. I'd also like to mention that Night and Screech also have the ear pink located here.

Is the top of the cats left ear supposed 2b pink as well? --Bluedragon64 (talk) 09:45, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

It can be if the artist chooses to do so. But it's not required. 12:52, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I cannot see shading at all on this, rip. please define it a few ticks?? <span style="">20:50, 04/16/2019

Re-uploaded. ​​​

Splashkit (TBC) (Ki) ~ For Approva
Not sure how I feel about this. Tinystream (talk) 22:10, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Reup Defined the shading and fixed a few mistakes. Also, to help, the light source is coming from the top left and the shading tint is green. Tinystream (talk) 22:31, April 13, 2019 (UTC)

Polite suggestion here, maybe dont use green shading on a brown cat? Malina457 (talk) 00:57, April 14, 2019 (UTC)malina

If used properly, green is a perfectly acceptable tint. Sometimes it can make the cat look green, but this doesn't look green. The tint works here imo 02:16, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

perhaps taper the stripes some?

Reup I can't draw tabbies. Also got rid of the highlights since the stripes in the highlights looked weird, plus it didn't really add any depth. If you want me to add the highlights back, just ask. Tinystream (talk) 05:14, April 14, 2019 (UTC)

I actually think these stripes are pretty good lol. CBA? 12:53, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Sorry to break, but is that thick line on the front paw unsmudged/unblurred shading? If so, could you smooth it out?

The line on the bottom of the paw? That's supposed to be a darker underpaw, since most tabbies' paws are dark on the bottom. I can reduce it, though, if it's bothering anyone. Tinystream (talk) 03:11, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps just smooth the transition a little^^ I'd also elongate a few of the stripes on the haunch, they're bordering on what we've in the past referred to as a triangle tabby; so to avoid it getting tweak nommed later a small fix would work.

Sorry I wasn't able to reupload today, should get it done in either a few hours or tomorrow, depending on what I feel like! Tinystream (talk) 06:59, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Lion's Roar (E) - CBA
going to tweak the ancient so the stripes aren't so greenish 03:57, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

could you re-upload that? it doesn't see to be showing it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 04:14, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:39, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Could you add some light to the stomach area. With your source I think there'd be some there. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:24, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 22:28, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

So sorry to break the CBA but I think there's waste around the muzzle? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  13:27, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

waste doesn't break the CBA

Ah well then that's a relief- <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:45, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Plumstone (Warrior) ~ For Evaluation
00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

For some reason wikia isn't showing jt but from the discord inage, her design should match File:Plumstone.apprentice.png also be sure to not thumb images as it messes with the format. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:31, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and dull the ear/nosepink, as it looks rather neon. 06:23, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does it look now? 00:48, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

She has to match her apprentice. The body is facing a different direction granted, but the Head still the same direction and some of the side the Apprentice shows is visible. You must match her colors to that as they do not match up right now, and match basic patch placement, and smoothness. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 11:37, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink, smudge the patches, and smooth out the shading. 22:03, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I used #dd983d for the patches mixed with #844711, and black with a low opacity. #553c33 for the earpink. Eyes should be amber, base for that is #dca864 I think. The black base is just pure black. The patches need to be rougher and thinner. Nose color is #1e1616. 01:03, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the colours, Patch. I redid the whole thing.

Expand, define, and smooth out the shading. For the shading use a dark tint, like blue or red. Then run the blur tool or smudge tool over it to make it look pretty. You can also go to Filters>Blur>Gaussian Blur, the best way to get the shading looking smooth. Smudge the patches a lot more in the direction of the fur as well. 21:42, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

I'll blur the shading and I'll define the ear depth and eye depth.

Reuploaded. What about now?

Better. However, please expand the shading more, and define it. Her patches are lighter, sharper, and smaller. 22:12, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Thriftpaw (A) - For Evaluation
Didn't know what her eye color was, so I just guessed. Hope that's ok? --Pondleaf (talk) 12:17, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Good first try, but first of all your heading is actually incorrect as it needs either for approval or for Evaluation. I can't find you on the projects table so idk if this should be approval or evaluation but if needed someone can fix it. Second, your file names incorrect, we've got a file naming format! It should be File:Thriftpaw.apprentice.png rather than what you have. Also, could you define all the shading? <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#302B54" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#483D8B" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#6A5ACD" face="Segoe Script" >Ranko <font color="#836FFF" face="Segoe Script" >Kanzaki. 12:35, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

I've also added you to the reservation table. Make sure to claim the image you want and date it before posting another artwork to the approval page! 13:00, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth. 13:02, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

You need to match her kit, i still have the file if you need it. 13:43, April 15, 2019 (UTC)

Okay, can I have the file then? --Pondleaf (talk) 07:02, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Pouncestep (A) ~ For Approval
All color from warrior image. Comments? 14:24, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the front legs, please? ​​​​

Reuploaded. 01:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Darkflower (E) ~ For Approval
Comments? 14:24, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest and haunch. 22:52, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 00:55, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Alt E) - For Approval
light coloured solids make me cry <span style="">20:53, 04/16/2019

Can you smooth that bottom/haunch shading? This is amazing, how do you art like this <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:27, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

reups fake it till u make it that's how <span style="">17:57, 04/17/2019

Raven Pelt (L) - For Approval
tbh idk how the shading looks bc its so dark on my computer <span style="">21:31 Tue Apr 16

Texture needs to be rougher. 21:37, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Snaptooth (W) - For Approval
Not sure if I should put for approval or evaluation? Going to tamper with the shading, it looks a little strange on the website. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:55, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Should be for approval since you were re-added as a Warrior. Welcome back Jose! I like you chararts, I saw them in archives. Smudge the pelt into the earpink and I think the stripes are slightly rougher on the apprentice? Eh, I could be wrong. Can you define the shading on the front leg closest to us?;) 23:57, April 16, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ah thanks, those are so old lol. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:13, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

You have waste under the tail-tip. 00:42, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes just a bit? Also, Potato, the kit is first and I had every intention of keeping this pattern when I redid it. I would appreciate it if that was matched. (not that this doesn't, I'm just addressing a comment) ​​​​​

That's fine, Jayce. 01:18, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Where do you see waste? I dont see any. --

10:53, 4/17/2019

Reuploaded - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  20:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Hollowspring (W) - For Approval
My new set, hopefully! 00:58, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. 01:39, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:46, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (WC) ~ For Approval
I give up. 01:45, April 17, 2019 (UTC)


 * drags Vec back* not so fast. Define the shading on the front legs. 02:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reups Ended up kinda redoing it. Much happier with this one. Do I still need to define the leg shading? 13:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Just a tiny bit, perhaps. Other than that, well done. I think this is looking wonderful. ​

Reups Thanks! 23:53, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Cloud (Storm) (Alt. E)- For Approval
Comments? I might need to smooth out the shading, I'll do that tomorrow. 02:06, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

there's a bit of waste behind the head

next to the ear too actually. also there appears to be shading leaking around the haunch/underbelly area.

The shading should be smoothed too and it wouldn't hurt tk add a tad more depth. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

define light more on the front paws please. --

06:39, 4/17/2019

Reuploaded  23:08, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

shading is leaking on the front leg. smooth out the shading on the haunch and add depth everywhere

Tabby (star) ~ For Approval
decided to be ambitious and do a tabby + texture lol. style inspired by stagleap

could you expand the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 06:39, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

might I suggest adding a dorsal stripe to the markings on the back? these look a little on the ‘y-tabby’ side, and that would probably alleviate that 07:50 Wed Apr 17 2019

reups wasn't too sure about how to do the dorsal stripe but i tried my best :/

Shellfur (W) ~ For Approval
fox helped with this boy, he's such a cutie. i adore this design. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 05:40, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

some of the shading is leaking away from the back leg closest to us 07:48 Wed Apr 17 2019

Could you redline where you mean? I'm having trouble seeing it <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 08:02, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

looks like it's on the bottom of the haunch. Also, this is your choice but could you consider removing the cream on the haunch? it wasn't really part of his original design on his kit

The kit won't show it, as the new kit blank shows the same side as the apprentice and I really like his cream there. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 18:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

I feel like the design that the kit had should be followed, Mink. This is Fox's pattern, so her choices should be respected. Please remove the cream. ​​​

I agree with mink, the kit wont even show this side, no other blank does actually. Malina457 (talk) 23:01, April 17, 2019 (UTC)Malina

No, I agree with Fox and Jayce. 23:07, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

The redone kit will show more of the haunch, and given that the apprentice does not have this kind of haunch style with the cream, the pattern still needs to be matched. I'm getting quite tired of the disregard for the kit images despite the fact that Fox is still here and still holds claim over the master pattern.

I'm removing the cream, I'll reup when I'm home. That was just to fill that space that was bare. So yeah, I'll remove it. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:29, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Sunnypelt (W) - For Approval
i like her name 08:00 Wed Apr 17 2019

max this is beautiful! this is your choice but i feel like you could expand the tail shading on the tip more? --

10:54, 4/17/2019

Frondwhisker (W) - For Approval
Shading looks horrendous but I guess we'll see. The colors are taken from the apprentice.

19:42, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

There's some waste under the back foot. Also smooth out the shading a little? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:33, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. 22:49, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:31, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

The apprentice stripes seem thicker, could you thicken them? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 00:35, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:45, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Wraithlike tortoiseshell (Star) - For Approval
I'm not sure what to name this file? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:19, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

This is stunning. Could you define/expand the shading? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:22, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks ^^ - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:29, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Define the eye depth? Malina457 (talk) 23:01, April 17, 2019 (UTC)malina

Reuploaded <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:12, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but this counts as a new image, and you can only have two if you have an elder reserved and up... 00:35, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

I don't have an elder, I only have Snaptooth and Wraithlike tortoiseshell. <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:40, April 18, 2019 (UTC)

Longtail (e) ~ For Approval
same thing as last time, but i did lighten the base color. 22:24, April 17, 2019 (UTC)

Flamepelt (Alt E) - For Approval
so dumbass me goofed and used the longhaired lineart.... I'm gonna go and fix that.

Re-uploaded. Looked better long-furred.

Palesky (W) ~ For Approval
i don't think I can brighten the white on the paws since it's all in shadow