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Cloudpelt (D) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading, as it was blotchy. OA was Bramble and a tweak by Leaf-storm. Comments? 07:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:14, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to remove the shading at the base of the tail and put some more on the end? It doesn't really make sense to me. Skt Like a baws  22:41, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded :3 07:13, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his lower back, Looks good! -- 04:16, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base-tail shading, it's darker than the rest. :3 09:11, 06, 06, 2012

Re-uploaded :3 Pretty sure the changes aren't showing,   22:41, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around the flank and base of the tail. 01:01, 07, 06, 2012

Sharpclaw (Ki) - tweak
- because the muzzle is darker and looks gray rather than lighter ginger. 00:32, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around his head. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:34, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten his chest, too. 09:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes a bit to match the other images? 13:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Should it be blurred more, the stripes will disappear. 14:25, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink on our right a bit. 18:28, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 00:44, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste between the hind paw and the forepaw on our right. :3 02:26, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but no matter how far I tilt my screen, I cannot see it. 02:36, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

She's right, 'Teldy. It's there. I can see it too.

Dappletail (W) - Redone
It was redone because it wasn't an actual dappled tortoiseshell. Comments? 16:27, June 3, 2012 (U

Define the yellow parts more so it matches the elder. 18:11, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the other parts as well, and smudge the patches more to match the elder. 99.111.198.23 18:51, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, that was me. >.<  18:53, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad, and enlarge and blur the earpink~ Skt Like a baws  21:20, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

If you'd like, I can give you a color palette of what I used for the elder. Breeze whisker  00:46, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Breezy, can you? 23:26, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Poppycloud (Q) - Tweaked
Shading needed defininging. owo OA was Scarlet owo. 19:44, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad?

Define the highlights; she looks like she just got darker. 01:21, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 00:43, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

While we're at it, smudge the patches more and make them more reddish. 09:19, 06, 06, 2012

The colors match the warrior, I'd say (it's probably the lighting that's making it seem like they don't). However, yes, DJ's right; they //do// need to be smudged. Not a whole lot, but, just so it matches a little better.

I gotta withdraw this. It's the last week of school, and we be gettin' all busies and stuffs. owo 04:10, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Okie...I'll take over. ouo 06:18, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. 08:18, 07, 06, 2012

Uploaded. 8D 09:13, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading and lighten it up on the white foot a tad. Skt Spoilers... 03:49, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 13:06, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (A) - Redone
OA was Wildy, she needed to be actually dappled. I'm sorry Icefrost (I think?), I know this doesn't match the warrior but this was difficult enough as it was to do :S Breeze sent me the direct colors so they're directly off her elder. I wouldn't be surprised if I need to fix a lot of stuff tbh  01:40, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't mind trying to recreate your pattern :p 23:26, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the patterns some more. Skt Like a baws  12:15, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think the patches should be a bit more concentrated, but seeing as this is the opposite side of the cat, that's your choice. Breeze whisker  03:00, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (W) ~ Tweaked
Heh. Fail. Needed to be shaggy. Comments? 15:31, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make it more go with the direction of the fur and be less cluttered? Not to be mean, but this gives me the impression that he's not groomed and has mange. One thing you could do is make is furry around the back of his neck, a good example is a Maine Coon because I consider them shaggy and they have that  16:04, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Mmm agreed, and maybe lessen the furryness a bit. He's shaggy, not quite messy. 19:45, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried... 20:09, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (w) tweaked
Right, this is my first time tweaking :3 His shading needed to be redone, and I also made his earpink more like his deputy's, hope he looks good! 18:27, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you get rid of the black border? Or is that just how it uploaded.-- 18:34, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and define the ear pink.

Blur the shading too. 21:33, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded defined the shading, and lightened the shading. -- 00:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. 01:20, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded lightened the shading. -- 07:14, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur it a bit more. C: Skt Spoilers... 01:55, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred it a bit. -- 03:01, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste under the hind legs/tail. 11:50, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (CG) - Tweaked
OA was Hiddensun and then I added mud. Just made him shaggy. Comments? 23:47, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

I know this isn't what it was nominated for...but could you be a dear and define the ear pink. I can't even tell there's anything there. XD

Re-uploaded, m'dear :P 00:31, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you center and rotate that earpink a bit? It's leaning off to one side. Breeze whisker  02:56, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:44, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the fur on top of the mud. Floofy mud. XDD 05:21, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Or maybe add specks of brown to the floofy lineart on the mud. Dad be cool owo 06:22 Thu Jun 7

There's some stray waste around the ear on this--> side, around the shoulder on <--this side, and the haunch/tail base. 06:25, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Crop the image. 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:40, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Brightheart (Alt. W2) - Redone/Tweaked
Just added more dapples to match the manga image better. I suppose it could be considered a redo, but since OA was me it's more of a tweak. Comments? 03:38, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty. The part between her haunch and back, could you blur the dapples/flecks there more? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 04:51, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a bit. Lovely Scat~ 05:20, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

PALEH!! HOW DARE YOU CALL MY WIFE THAT!!! *KICKS* I think the lineart should match the warrior but I'm not sure. So beautiful <33333 05:28 Thu Jun 7

Haha. *grins at mounty* Yes it should match, and I seem to remember multiple people saying she was shown in the manga where this alt's from as shorthair, so maybe change her to that. 06:16, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

I really hate to say this....but if we're matching that...shouldn't she also be gray instead of ginger and white?

We've done them with colors before. 06:25 Thu Jun 7

Oh, jeez. One of mine. I see, then. You're right. Plus, it looks better like this anyways. xD

Blur the speckles above her haunch. They're sharp compared to the rest of the spots. 12:00, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also, get rid of the torn ear, as she is shone without it in the manga. 18:59, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 04:35, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Do you think you can center the earpink a bit? 21:57, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) ~ Tweaked
Okay. He needed floof. OA was Evanphoto, with, what i'm assuming was ethier taken over, or tweaked but Icy, with a tweak by DJ, and another tweak by Loon. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 05:42, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Add more floof and make it match more. ;3 08:28, 07, 06, 2012

Reuploaded. I copied some floof from his warrior. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 08:48, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think the others edited the outside lineart, also. Breeze whisker  20:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And there should be more on his body. Try and make it match. 21:57, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

You know, all you have to do is have both images open next to each other in, say, GIMP or something. it's not all that hard. XD

Don't eat me! I'm withdrawing this, but if no one wants to work on it, might I still have it? I'm gonna be busy for a bit...My cousins are here for a week, then after they leave, I'm gonna go up to Kansas to visit my Grandmother. So like...yay? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 00:12, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I'd like to work on it since it's my image... Sorry, but it's fair game. 00:17, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, Loon. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 00:18, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 02:01, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ki) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. 21:01, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? 21:08, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

And do kittypet kits need a collar...? I can't remember x.x 22:02, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

He wasn't a kittypet, he was a rouge or something, he was part of BloodClan as a kit. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing Sirius lover 22:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Unsure on changes. 22:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt Spoilers... 22:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Kill ze waste. 22:54, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the black a tad. 02:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading a tiiiny bit lighter, so the white is lighter. (But then you might have to define the shading on the back. Doesn't make sence. =_=) 07:19, 08, 06, 2012

Re-Ups^ @Dazzy, I'd rather not smudge because it doesn't look smudged on the rogue and loner images. 21:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Alt Ki) - Redone
Cloudy said I could redo this since it's just a solid. OA was Squirrelflame29. 00:37, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) ~ Tweaked
Cloudy let me have him :3 Just defined the shading (I think that was all I needed to do, correct me if I'm wrong o3o) Comments? 01:04, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his tail and the earpink. 01:08, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Briarlight (K) ~ Tweaked
Made the colour match her other images. Comments? 08:42, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Berrynose (A) ~ Tweaked
OA is Shelly, and the color was off. Please don't ask me to change anything else, as it's only being tweaked for the color... The colors come right from the xcf of the alt warrior.