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Minnowtail (Alt. A2) ~ On Hold
I think I made her too dark >m< I shall fix that.... Anywho, she was described with a dappled pelt~ Comments? 23:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, especially on the back ear. I love it! 8DDD 23:17, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes arent showing :c 00:08, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the nosepink. Looks pretty! 8D 08:13, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the face just a tad. Nice job, Fallow. 11:15, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Fallow! C: Define the earpink. 14:47, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks everyone ^^ 16:58, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the belly a tiny bit? :3 04:14, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face, too. ♫Purplemoon♪  Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck!  11:23, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 16:27, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? :3 14:46, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is great and all, but who says that was a mistake? It was never stated otherwise, she could very well be a dappled dark gray cat.... 23:21, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I was thinking, I think that since she was only mentioned once it would be an alt but I think that this should be the main apprentice image and the warrior should be changed. 23:27 Sun Mar 25

Paleclaw's right. We're already having a discussion about partial-description alts, and this would be partial. She already is gray, in this image, just mentioned with dapples. All cats have some kind of pelt pattern, for what I know, but it just may not be visible. Plus, dapples don't make much of a difference, sorry. 23:34, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come cats like Lilystem get an alt. for being described as a tabby? I think this should stay. 01:53, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps Lilystem should be tweaked to a tabby then. Either way, I thought we decided something about what gets alts and what gets added? Didn't we decide that if it's completely plausible then it'd be added? I can't quite remember, but I thought that's what we worked out. Meaning this alt should be declined and all her images tweaked. 00:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Isn 't this sirt of assuming her description? We don't know for sure that she's actually a dappled cat, and it could very well be a mistake. But in any case, if this goes ahead, cats like Mudclaw would have to be tweaked too, and it seemd really unecessary. *Bad at making points* Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 00:07, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Skt's right. This is assuming descriptions, something we don't do here. If we don't assume with genders and eyelashes in the manga, then why are we assuming descriptions? I say we keep it, and if we find out later that she dappled, then we can delete this and tweak the others. It's not partial, honestly. We know she's gray. For all we know, the dappled coat could be an error. 06:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I've decided to place this image on hold until a final decision can be made. This is not to be declined, approved or archived until said decision is reached. 07:05, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

-didn't notice Misty left a comment- Should I reupload or wait until we figure out what we're doing with her? 13:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploading. Cloudeh told me to start up the discussion so... I think this should stay an alt. It was the only time she was described with it, and she has never been described with dapples in the alligiances. 18:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think she meant start it on the talk page. XD But really, since when do we not add descriptions purely cause they were only mentioned once? If we did that, Spottedleaf wouldn't have half her description, Firestar wouldn't have a pale belly, Brindleface wouldn't be mottled, so and and so forth. We shouldn't assume it's wrong just cause it was only mentioned once. 08:44, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the shading on the ear. 01:22, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Kestrelflight (Alt. MCA) - CBA
It's been forever since I had something up for approval. Trying a new style of mottled cats but I think he looks a bit like a tabby... He was described as a mottled gray tom in Hollyleaf's Story under the name of Kestrelpaw and Barkface was the medicine cat, so he was a mca. Comments? 01:57, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah he does look like a tabby. Isn't this supposed to match my mottled gray version anyway? 01:59, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I honestly have no idea how you did that, it's incredible. But I tried. 02:11, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I can always send you the .xcf, if you like C: Also, I used the pen jitter tool with a darker and lighter shade, then slightly blurred it. 02:12, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'd love that. I PM you my email on facebook. Thanks Ivy! 02:19, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this, so I can work on a rogue. Anyone who wants to take this over, may. I had no hope of matching Ivy's epicness anyway... 20:06, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 06:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. File changes aren't showing yet, I think... 21:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? Nicely done, Stone. 21:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt.A)~For Approval
I don't think I uploaded it right, but I tried. Comments? 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded-- got rid of the waste 18:47, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I don't know what happened to the last one. It's not in the declined nor in the approved, I thought this was being worked on already. 19:33 Fri Mar 30

No, it's fine. Mounty, you derp. =P

Define and darken the shading. 20:23, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Heathertail.apprentice.alt.png. 20:32, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Defined and darkened the shading and renamed it 21:29, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Loonie, would it be instead because Heathertail has another one? 21:44, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the tail, head, and back paws. 21:50, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

When did that get there? *wasn't there before* smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more. 22:36 Fri Mar 30

Define the shading, and I think there's waste on her front paws as well. 03:52, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Got rid of the waste and defined the shading 12:53, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

The ear-punk ear-pink seems to go over the line thing next to the ear... o3o On both ears, by the way. It's your choice, but if you want to, can you define the depth in the eye? *Your choice* Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink more, too. And it might just be my computer, but there seems to still be waste, too. Sorry if that made no sense about the ear and the line and the ear-punk ear-pink x3 13:10, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more ^^ 13:48, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the back ear. And, optional, but can you add a little shading to the side of the face that's not towards us? It'll give it more depth. 21:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC

Reuploaded--defined the shading, smudged the earpink into the pelt and got rid of the waste 22:41, March 31, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste on his ear, back paw, and front paw. 23:03, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pelt into the earpink some more and blur it. 23:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this. And try to not upload a different image every time you reupload. 23:45, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--removed the waste and blured the earpink into the pelt 21:48, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Moonshine, stop uploading a new image each time. Rename it what Atelda told you to. 21:56, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

I tried but it became a redlink. I don't know what to do! I am sorry 22:00, April 1, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

You just upload it as   Just...it works for everyone, it should work for you. >.> Also, erase the waste. 22:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded--erased the waste 18:56, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

There's still waste by the far ear. 01:24 Tue Apr 3

I can't get rid of it. I have tried erasing it 4 or 5 times. I don't really know what else to do. 22:58, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Reuploaded--I tried to get rid of the waste, but I don't think it actually went away 11:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

It didn't; Do you use layers? If so, scroll through every single layer and try erasing it. If that doesn't work or you don't use layers, I don't know what to do o3o 11:26, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Do you want me to get rid of the waste for you? 16:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

theres waste still on the cat  01:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Red (R) - CBA
classic tabby fail. see it here as changes aren't showing. comments? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 05:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thin out the main body stripes a tad? I did Fleck as a classic tabby if that helps. Marvelous <3 05:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 05:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. clicketh for changes  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 05:41, April 2, 2012 (UTC)'''

Define the earpink. <3 Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 23:18, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs a bit? :3 19:39, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. Weylon '''Distinctly Unique. 03:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly~ 19:00, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

This is sooo not a fail. Just define the shading on the tail because it's a little hard to see. 15:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''BetteR? Weylon Distinctly Unique. 17:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 22:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tess (Ro) - CBA
Uh.....I'm indifferent about this one...I didn't have my tablet on hand and I just am out of practice with GIMP...kinda.... Uh...if the changes aren't showing, you can look here. o3o 05:06, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the top haunch shading 05:07, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 05:10, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely! Just blur the shading just a bit where the leg is. Cinder14:36, April 3, 2012 (UTC)(Sig isn't working)

Reuploaded c: 16:09, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading. ;) 20:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:23, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. Nice. 03:02, 04, 04, 2012

Reuploaded - Not sure about the changes.. 21:03, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 21:30, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ro) - CBA
I actually like this one. If changes don't show, look here. Comments? 07:49, 02, 04, 2012

Lighten the shading a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  13:34, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the shading some, if you will :)  15:56, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Look here if changes don't show. =/ 02:06, 03, 04, 2012

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and define the shading under her neck/chin. 11:38, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on her tail. 20:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  03:14, 04, 04, 2012

Maybe make the front of her paws a tad lighter  19:53, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  01:23, 07, 04, 2012

CBA? 02:24, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) - For Approval
Any comments on improvement ? Makimotto 11:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

Wrong file name. Honestly, I don't see what's so hard about re-uploading over File:Yellowfang.rogue.png. 11:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  13:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine...It looks cool this way honestly. I think that shading should be artist choice. Shading can be hard or soft, you know. 13:37, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a kit so this is under evaluation. I think this is over 80% All of the colors are right, it's the right size, and there is no blurred lineart from what I can tell. Just add the line on her muzzle like the rest of her images and make the lineart on the ear a pixel bigger. This looks wonderful! 13:41 Mon Apr 2

Agreed. Makimotto will become an apprentice of PCA, and the heading is changed to For Approval. 15:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

No, she had shading like this before, and that's why her images were redone, unless you want to revert all of her new images to the old version. So, as nice as it looks, you need to blur the shading. 15:55, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Or the other images could get a shading tweak. Honestly, I like this version very much. Really well done. Just try to match the scars on the other images. There's no fur missing there. 16:20, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

While I like this shading, Ivy's right, we already tweaked her images before to get rid of it. It'd be pointless to tweak again, so please make it match. 21:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, the reason why this may look not blurred is because I added someshading where her fur would be all scragley. I tried to blur it really good without the whole light source disappearing. I also was going to add the line, but it kinda weird, but I can understand that you won't them to all look the same. I tried to Line up the scars, and a few are off, so sorry about that too. If you can't see it, here http://www.iaza.com/work/120402C/iaza15663796583500.png Makimotto 22:44, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

No, we want the straggly fur to be gone. As we said, her other chararts were tweaked to get rid of that. Blur the shading so it's smooth, not showing the fur. And I'm not sure you're understanding what we mean about getting rid of the lineart on the scars, but I don't know how to explain..... 23:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

K, I can get it gone... I just wanted it to look good, But I'll change it. And I didn't even see the part about getting rid of the lines. But ok, I'll do it. Makimotto 23:39, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto



Makimotto 00:25, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

Blur the shading more.Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 09:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blend it, too.^^ 15:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! I think there is just a bit of gray lineart on the ears, sorry if I'm mistaken. 02:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Flick (Ro) Under Evaluation
I reserved it and finished as fast as I could. I hate this. Dx Changes might not be showing...Changes are here. Comments?

12:25, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great, but needs a transparent backround 12:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Grr. I know. I can't get a transparent background... when I took the blank from the charart page, it was white... 12:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a proper light source and define it. 14:29, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I can make it transparent for you if you dont know how to do it, ,16:47,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Okay, thanks :) 21:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind, reuploaded. Experimenting with fur textures. Gahh, changes ain't showing, look right here. I lightened the neck shading just a little bit. Yuck, yuck, yuck. I also have one without the texture so if you want to see, tell me. 01:31, April 3, 2012 (UTC.

The fur texture looks like mottles. Define the shading and light source. Don't worry, practice makes perfect! Also, blur the earpink. 05:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

All right C: Redone. I made one without texture and one with, but I'm going for the one with texture, even though it's atrocious, it's the less atrocious of the two 05:35, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

The fur texture still looks like mottles... 00:36, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I wanted it to look like that, but I can change it. If you all like the non textured one better, I can make it the non textured one 00:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I know you wanted it like that, but sorry, it doesn't really look like fur, more like mottles. And this is a short haired cat, any smudging on a short-hair would be less dramatic. 02:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

All right reuploaded If changes ddon't show, it's here 03:03, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 15:52, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767433748300.png 03:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

You'll need to dull down the highlights or blur them or something...I don't think it should be that glossy-looking unless the description calls for it. Plus, it seems unnatural. 06:03, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I redi it :) 18:42, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Gaghhhh.... better? http://www.iaza.com/work/120407C/iaza17767482237200.png 18:45, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Onion (Ro) ~ For Approval
Comments? &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 14:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please reupload this, then link us to the version in the file history that will show? The images are being stupid and showing the old rogue. Thank you. 15:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I reuploaded it but the changes still won't show. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 16:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/archive/8/8b/20120402160200%21Onion.rogue.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 16:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the black, and define the shading. Hmm... nice work, Aeris. 17:40, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. If it doesn't show when I publish this I'll give the picture. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:46, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza13142513712900.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:50, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the black a little more. 18:20, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

http://www.iaza.com/work/120403C/iaza13142517012200.png &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 18:24, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it even more. You'll not destroy anything with it. ,18:57,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Work on it or it will be declined ,17:49,April 6,2012 (UTC)

Stripes (Ro) - CBA
He's a classic tabby! Comments? 17:31, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Awesome job! ^^ Darken the shading. 18:20 Mon Apr 2

Reuploaded 20:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes some more. 21:05, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, smudge the stripes in the way the fur goes and layer the shading on top of the stripes 21:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

This is the wrong version of the blank. There's no fur on the back of his arm nor his hock, and that weird random spot on his tail wasn't fixed. Look here for the correct version. 23:58, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? 00:10, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel behind the back haunch closest to us. 01:06, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste behind the front legs. 03:03 Tue Apr 3

And on the back and tail too. 21:33, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 21:59, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

(From what I'm seeing) There is some waste around his flank, tail (tip), bottom of the left ear (the cats left), inbetween the chest and belly fur the left and the hind haunches. 02:54, 04, 04, 2012

Reuploaded In case the changes don't show. 17:03, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the tail stripes a little more, please. 23:12, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:55, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the legs and tail a bit and smudge the face stripes a tiny bit c: 20:49, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:33, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 04:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cora (Ro) ~ For Approval
Here she is. I don't know if the changes are showing yet. Comments? 20:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Here's the link to the image. 21:10, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The ahding was bad on that. He's another link: =P

Define the tail shading. 14:02 Tue Apr 3

Blur the shading and smudge the earpink more. 20:11, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. [http://www.iaza.com/work/120404C/iaza17741026396800.png Changes. ] 21:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

This seems small on here, but from what I see on the other thingie up there, maybe blur the hightlights, though could be just me, I had to put my face right to the computer screen to look at it XD I am Your worst nightmare  22:15, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:39, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Russetfur (Ro) - CBA
Comments? Changes probably aren't showing 23:27, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Fabulous! 03:05 Tue Apr 3

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing. 16:48, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit and smudge the ear pink in ^^ 03:10, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:30, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 21:32, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (R)~For Approval
Here his is! I love doing black cats so.. Anyways, Comments? 23:55, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Rename it File:Shrewtooth.rogue.png (basically just get rid of the extra .png) and maybe define the shading~<3 01:20, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

I can see a bit of waste trailing off the ear. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 05:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 11:18, April 5, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the shading and smooth the edges. 02:25, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (D) - For Approval
Squirreldeputy! Getting those stripes the right colour was a pain... 01:02, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more like the warrior. -steals- Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 01:08, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's there, I promise xD 01:53, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smooth outh the floofs to more resemble the warrior? Don't have them stick out as much, but have them laying on each other... if my explination is made of too much fail, feel free to ask for a redline. 01:55, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful! I can't tell if there's a stripe above her eye or not and define the ear-pink. 02:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mind if I suggest adding a scar to her stomach? In Eclipse, her stomach was so bad she had a scar. (From what I remember she did, which is why she can't have kits.) 21:27, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm leaving very soon and I'm almost positive I won't have time to work on her until I get back on the thirteenth. All I'm asking is: please don't decline her. I worked hard to get her and I wouldn't want her taken away just because I'm going to Europe. It's not like I'm disappearing on your guys; you know where I am, and you know I don't have access to a computer or likely any Internet at all. Besides, we're in no hurry to get her approved, at least as far as I know. So, just... let her be, okay? -puppy dog eyes- 01:24, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

This image is not to be touched until Oblivion gets back. Anyone that does will face my wrath. She earned this image the proper way, so it's hers. Putting on hold until she gets back. 14:47, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

After discussing this with Cloudskye and getting Scarlet's approval, we've come to the decision that this image will be treated with the same rules every other image is treated with. There is no special treatment for anyone no matter the circumstances, least of all on such a coveted image. If this image is not updated within 7 days, it will be declined and whoever wants it at that point will be allowed to do it if they reserve if first.

However, please note that there are to be absolutely NO COMMENTS asking for or claiming the image. Please follow proper PCA ettiquite when commenting: no repeating a critique someone else has made, no flooding. Just comment as normal. Thank you. 23:31, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Ro) ~ For Approval
That was quite fun to do.~ Comments, anyone? (Rogues FTW.) P.S. If it ain't showing up, here y'are: http://www.iaza.com/work/120404C/iaza17380217006800.png 06:07, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. 10:59, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, if there is any. Nicely done, Thistle. 16:20, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks.;D 22:43, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 15:42, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you blur the shading more on the belly? 16:28, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 16:53, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading the slightest bit, and I'll re-CBA. 16:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes on his haunch dont seem to match his other images. 19:38, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

? I looked exactly at the other images while doing it, I dunno. And Skye, that's the darkest it'll go. >> 19:42, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Thistly...to fix the shading, you can add another layer of shading over what already exists, blur it to the same consistency, and then lighten the opacity. :3 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) (Alt) ~ For Approval
I'm really proud of this :3 Changes aren't showing. 11:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste at the ears. Make her muzzle shorter and extend the line on her face. 13:33 Tue Apr 3

Can you also define the eye color? To me, it looks pure white. 21:58, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry about the white on the side of her mouth. I tried getting rid of it but nothing worked. 23:19, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch and back scars look a little thick. The scraggly fur could be a little smoother. Could you also darken the shading and blur it some? 16:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's defined to the max, but I blurred it. 23:05, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste by the ears and there's a line coming out of the bridge of the nose so get rid of that and I'll CBA. 22:39 Sat Apr 7

Willie (Ro) ~ For Approval
This was a fail... >-> *flails arms* I tried :P 21:48, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Wow! This is awesome. ;D Define the shading on the tail and belly-ish area. Lookin' good.~ 22:46, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes 16:55, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't really have any shading on the belly, so I only defined it on the tail.. 21:13, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ Under evaluation
Okay, I'm rusty at this, and fail at shading, and feel like I'm about to do somethinf wrong, I will add shading after I'm done testing with it, seeing which seems more normal, and yes there is shading on the tail, and yes, I tried to get as close to the original image as possible, and yes, I suck XD, please don't hurt me *hides* Because I'm sure I'm doing this wrong XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:16, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Btw, added note, someone might have to help me with the shading XD I am Your worst nightmare  23:18, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more, make the ear pink less neon, and lighten/blur the highlights. Not bad ^^. 23:19, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lol what shading, the only shading on the charart is the tail XD, and by less neon you mean darken? And alright, going to blur the highlights now XD. I am Your worst nightmare  23:21, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I added shading I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  23:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it File:Minty.rogue.alt.png? <3 00:26, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's what it is. I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  00:29, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oh wait, alright, nvm XD I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  00:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded  I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  00:33, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's not an alt..... rename it just plain Minty.rogue.png 00:55, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  01:01, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

No capitalization. Minty.rogue.png exactly. 02:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Well you could have said that the first time. I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  21:38, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Not bad, Birdbrain. Blur the highlights. 23:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  blurred highlights, but now the shading looks seriously messed XD. I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  23:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

You can redo the shading if you want, but blur it too, and the highlights. <span style="">02:14, 05, 04, 2012

Alright, I'll have to redo the whole image then, because this was made on Pixlr X3, I'l have to do it after the weekend though, because I'm going to my trailer. -- I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  23:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Nutmeg (Ro) ~ For Approval
Right, my second charart I've put up for approval :3 Hope it looks okay! 01:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you. Rename this Nutmeg.rogue.png, not having "R" in caps and without the extra "png". Also can you unsmudge the patches some to match the queen image more? <span style="">02:19, 04, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded Hope this turned out right, this apparently requires source mode and I've never used it. Anyways, I tried to make the smudge lines a bit sharper and less faded to try to match the queen image. -- 04:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink a tad more. 10:50, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the earpink. -- 16:41, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I re did it to make it look more like her queen image, hope it looks better! -- 23:09, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Lovely <3. -- Weylon  '''Distinctly Unique. 12:34, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened the shading and made her a bit of a lighter grey to match her queen image better =P -- 15:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and possibly add a highlight to her head/face. It seems a bit flat. 19:09, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Added some things, blurred some things etc :3 -- 19:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Forgot some waste x.x -- 19:44, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Very pretty ^^ Define/darken the back shading? 21:35, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the white a bit. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lightened the shading a tad -- 04:06, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded just lightened the black to look more like her queen and lightened the shading. -- 17:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Stoneteller (NP) (Alt. He) - For Approval
He was described as a stone gray tom in Outcast. Solid gray cats kill me... Comments? 03:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't he already have an alt for this but just with stripes? 03:40 Wed Apr 4

Blur the shading on the arms, chest, and back thigh (whatever yu call cats' thighs) 06:07, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have mud? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Mountain, Whispering Breeze has an alt for being called a tabby and there are two different descriptions. @Sky, Stoneteller's don't get mud because they don't leave the cave or something, I don't remember the actual fact, besides that they don't get mud. 22:26, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come his normal image has mud? O.o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded @Sky sorry, I got it backwards... xP 01:41, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smudge/blur the mud some more so it looks less like tabby patches and more like mud? :3 23:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Barley (Ro) - For Approval
I tried my best to make it look like the loner, but this is the other side, so I connected to where it went off his body on the loner image. The changes might not show up, just a warning~ Spark  ♥  18:52 pm 08 Apr 2012

Define the shading 21:49, April 4, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Make him match the kit too. 22:17, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights on the black make him look grey. Darken it or reduce the highlights. Breeze whisker  04:07, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad, as well as what Moonshine suggested. 15:46, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to darken on another layer, since I closed GIMP accidentally. Spark ♥  19:47 pm 54 Apr 2012

Looks Wonderful! There is some waste all around the lineart, though. 20:50, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! I think I got rid of all the waste. Reuploaded~ Spark  ♥  21:09 pm 46 Apr 2012 21:09, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's still some waste near the far ear. 16:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded; think I got it :3 Spark  Candy, here I come! ♥  16:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC) There's some more :P 21:10, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I got it all this time. I put a color behind it and tilted the screen and I didn't see any~ Spark  Candy, here I come! ♥  22:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Bird (Ro) ~ For Approval
Nostalgiaaaaaaa. This cat has the first tabby design I ever made on my own. :3 Comments? 20:45, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a little and smudge the mud a little also? 22:16, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is fine. Nice job, Shelly. 23:08, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:17, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. Ro) ~ CBA
And that, kids, is how you do a black tabby. 8D Yes, they exist. And they look like this. This is a new image, too, so don't go thinking I have two rogues up when I shouldn't. One's an old rogue, and this is new. Comments? 21:53, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Amazing X3, maybe blur the stripes just a teensy bit, unless my eye-sight is really horrible XD. I am <sup style="font-family:Arial Bold;color:#9C0A50">Your worst nightmare  21:56, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Are you calling the dark parts of the light parts the stripes? Because, in this case, the light bits are the stripes. 22:47, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Black tabbies are the coolest-looking cats. :D Could you lighten the shading a little bit? Breeze whisker  04:06, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 04:09, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

I know this is going to sound so small...but could you define the depth in the eye? Jeez, Shelly. This is stunning. 15:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:17, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Could you darken the earpink? Gosh, Shelly, this is gawgus~ 01:53, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not. I was working from an image of a black cat with ghost stripes for this one, and they had rather pale skin. 02:03, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? An image like this deserves it. 02:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ratscar (Alt.W) ~ For Approval
He was described as a russet color. Comments? 23:15, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. 23:40, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Up the red a bit please? It looks a bit too close to the warrior image for my own preferences. Russet's a fuzzy color, you can bend it to suit your needs a bit. 23:50, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Correct me if I'm wrong, but he was described as fox-red, and red is basically a dark ginger, so shouldn't he have stripes? 17:21, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

When I was looking at his page, it said he was described as russet, not fox-red. 19:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Russet is reddish brown, not ginger. 21:38, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:10, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and darken it on the haunch. 16:31, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading. 23:56, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back~ 18:27, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Pounce (Ro) ~ For Approval
I named his file wrong DXXX I wll fix it ;.; So yah... Comments? 00:22, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink 01:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  02:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes. Make his pupil look somewhere else as he was described with a lazy eye. Make the tooth more visible. Smudge the back stripe and thin it out some. Lighten the shading on the legs farther away. 03:12, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is stunning. 8D Could you maybe at some highlights or something on the back so it stands out that it is more of a stripe and not so much darker shading? Breeze whisker  04:02, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~  16:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a little more. 01:25, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the haunch shading a bit. 18:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Boulderfur (W) For Approval
DDDx Please comment on this if you want to : / 01:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded there was weird stuff above his eyes. If changes don't show, contact me for link. 02:22, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 02:24, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to replica the shading on the apprentice 02:39, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is a bit blotchy, as is the ear pink. Can you even it out a bit? 03:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Round out the shading on the shoulder and lighten the fron of the legs. Breeze whisker  04:00, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 12:30, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading some more. <span style="">02:23, 06, 04, 2012 Reuploaded (here:http://www.iaza.com/work/120406C/iaza17767461998000.png) 03:19, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink a bit please. ^^ 13:43, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded c: tell me if changes don't show 14:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it OwO 19:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pink. This is good~ 00:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I colorpicked so I might not change it 12:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...going in a different direction from Rowan, desaturate the earpink ever so slightly? (just make it a bit more gray) 15:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Oh sorry, I meant gray XDD 16:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also, make the earpink more triangular and define the light source. 16:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Still, define the light source. 21:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the earpink more. 22:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt.W) - For Approval
woo Mr. Hawkfrost, comments? ,10:39, April 5,2012 (UTC)

Jeez. Tons of errors in TLH. Anyways, define the shading. 15:48, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

I dont like shadings on gray cats,reuploaded 16:19, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Shading on the feet looks darker than the rest. ♣Clover fern  00:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

reuploaded 10:06, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the paw shading is still darker then the rest x: 21:01, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading does not have to be the same darkness all around. Still, blur the shading. 23:27, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Snowkit (OTS) (Ki) ~ For Approval
Here he is~ I made his page so I'm super happy I got him! Comments? 22:25, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 83 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:46, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Offspring of Cloudtail <3 Darken the shading ever so slightly. Also, define the ear pink. 22:47, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Awww! It's so cute! Keep up the good work! --Physicmew wants to eat your toes with mustard 13:55, April 6, 2012 (UTC)


 * Please only comment when you find something that needs to be fixed. 13:59, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 20:09, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tiny bit, it looks more gray then white. I luff this <3 <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Raineh  <font face="Tempus Sans ITC">Pwns all others  23:58, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

If I lighten the shading anymore, it would be undefined o3o. 16:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm still having issues seeing the ear pink. Define it? If you do, I may consider a CBA. ;3 02:05, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrytail (Q) ~ For Approval
I do believe she's preggers now. Bleh. Comments? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:12, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, I thought she wasn't going to get a queen image. I remember that I asked if she would get one, and I think Shelly said no. 16:27, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

No, I asked, and got a yes. Also, take a look at the talk page again, I think she agreed she gets one. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 16:31, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less gray. 17:37, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Explodes* Omg so epic! :O This may just be my lap top lighting/screen but darken and define shading =P 16:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good! Smudge the orange color in the direction of the fur just a tad more. 01:20, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't change the earpink cause it's the same colour as the other images. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 02:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the orange and bit orangier; it looks kinda pale in comparison to her other chararts and smudge/enlarge the ear-pink. 03:25, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's this? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:40, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I really think both this and your kittypet version of her (I know it's already been archived, but I never got the chance to say this) could benefit from the use of special brushes to achive the same look. I make the Glalaxy brush in GIMP incredibly small, and used that in her patches after I smudged them slightly. I only say this, because her warrior image was not only smudged. Also, gah, Cherrytail, why! You could have picked a much better mate D: 14:14, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh. Thank you. -Hates patches- I'll try that. ^^ Heh. Sharpclaw. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 14:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a little taller. :3 23:16, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) ~ For Approval
Yay :) finally done. Although I don't think I did such a great job with the shading >.< 17:21, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

this is over the limit and will be declined. 17:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Not needed anymore, ,17:53,April 6,2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 18:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean by "over the limit"? 19:36, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

The limit for numbers of images that can be up for approval is 40 at one time, and this was over 40, but its fine now. Blur the earpink~ 20:56, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Oh ok- I forgot about that. Re-uploaded the shading wasn't defined cause I only saved the shaded version in psd :S gee, I'm so smart. I blurred the earpink, too, which I forgot to do in the first place 23:24, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the tan waste on his back. 23:44, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back paw closest to us. ♫Purplemoon♪  May the odds be ever in your favor  00:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded not sure if changes are showing 01:11, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink up a tad. 11:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 13:39, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur the tail shading. 16:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded changes should be showing. I didn't Blur the tail shading much because I don't think it was really necessary. 17:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the ear farthest away look tinted green o.O Also blur the highlights and lighten the tail shading. 19:22, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think changes are showing yet... I didn't blur the highlights cause I think they're fine. 19:28, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

The highlights look too concentrated. At least lower the opacity on them.? 23:37, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. better? (Changes should be showing) I also made the grayish parts more beige to match his other chararts. 00:56, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think, though it might just be my computer that ther is waste inbetween the ears. 01:19, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I kinda looks like that, but it's just the pixel blank  01:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Pinenose (Q) - For Approval
I finished The Last Hope today, and it didn't feel... complete to me for some reason. Here's Pinenose. Comments? 19:16, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 19:18, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 20:10, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:14, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin'  Weylon  Distinctly Unique. 01:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste around her chest and the right forepaw~ 14:46, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The changes should show when there's no more waste. 23:23, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Also around the tail, I forgot to mention that ^^; 01:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowflight (Ro) - For Approval
Mmm...Black kitty. <3333 Comments? 20:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black a bit and define the highlights~ 20:58, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the black just a bit, otherwise, it wouldn't match the warrior images. Also, I'm not defining the 'highlights', it looks fine as it is... 22:47, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded (redone) because the image was ugly. xPPP 22:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

(Maybe) smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more? 23:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't smudge the earpink, it's optional, and I don't do that. o3o 01:18, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Stoatpaw (A) ~ CBA
Hallelujah! Space! Mounty likey :3 Comments? 22:45 Fri Apr 6

Like someone said on another charart somewhere, I think he could be short haired since it's hard to tell a cat is skinny if it's hidden by long fur. Don't have to though. o3o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:54, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink and give it a slight orangish tint~ 23:03, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

N00by comment was n00by. Define the haunch shading a tad? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:22, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I smudged the earpink but I didn't change the color, I think it's fine. 00:05 Sat Apr 7

There's waste on his left ear. 14:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 20:52 Sat Apr 7

CBA? 02:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Harley (Alt Ro) ~ CBA
From the gray-brown to the gray-black alt. 8D 01:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more on the front leg closest to us. 14:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think the shading's fine. I took it from an image I just recently had approved. 15:00, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more. 21:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Y'know, I like this. CBA? 22:40 Sat Apr 7

Harley (Ro) ~ CBA
I had fun making thing :3 Comments? 02:00 Sat Apr 7

Can you define the brown? It says he was brown and gray and it may be just my computer, but I can't see the brown very well. This looks wonderful. 12:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I can actually see it fine, it's probably your computer o3o 12:42, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Most of the gray and brown tabbies I saw the brown was kinda grayish. 14:48 Sat Apr 7

Whoa, I could never make that 8D I think the shading on the muzzle should be lighter near the back of the head and darker near the muzzle though 15:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

* dies of epicness* Wow, Mounty, amazing. Define the tail shading? 15:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D I left the shading on the muzzle the same because I think it looks fine. 15:31 Sat Apr 7

Define the shading and give it some more depth. 22:05, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 22:36 Sat Apr 7

Dear god, Mounty. I'll never know how you make these things... CBA? 22:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Dewkit (TC) (Ki) ~ CBA
Berry lost her reservation, and I decided to take it. He's the offspring of my favorite character~ 02:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes less orange and more yellowy? :3 <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 02:28, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

They're supposed to be amber...isn't that what yellow and orange are? xD 02:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

<333 Define the earpink a wee bit. 15:55, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, amber is brown-yellow, like so. Yellow and orange are just yellow and orange. 15:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had to re-do it, since I derped and lost the layers. xD 18:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. 19:57 Sat Apr 7

Re-uploaded. 20:07, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and than I CBA this image. 8D 20:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:06, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

CBA? 21:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

enlarge the ear-pink a tad more  01:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink is fine. Plus, if it's too large, it looks awkward. Continuing CBA. 01:15, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (CG Alt) ~ For Evaluation
In Moonrise, he is described as black. First Cave Guard!! Comments? Constructive criticism welcome. 05:54, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, lighten it on the legs, and the earpink is way to big and needs to be blurred. 06:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 06:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights a tad. 12:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. 15:54, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think there should be a highlight on the lower haunch area. Could you add some shading? 21:37, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Is it me, or did the earpink disapparate? O.o <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Ro) ~ For Approval
Chu changes showing? Anyways, Clovertail's rogue. It's ugly ;-; 12:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sweet! May be just my computer, but define the earpink and the shading on the back legs. This is great! 12:44, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 12:56, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights", or at least make them a little bigger, but it's your choice :3 *steals* 15:03, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. 15:52, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and make the back of the paw darker than the front. 17:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

You should difine where the light is coming from, it looks like its coming from three places. 01:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading, too~ Oh, and Bracken: shading placement is artist's choice :3 02:50, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (Ro) - For Approval
Changes not showing again? Here. --> http://www.iaza.com/work/120408C/iaza13655678205100.png 17:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mooneh, this is number 41 on the list xD You nub~ I think a SM may have to decline this. 17:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Now it's fine. 8D 18:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match his other images. Add more and make them lighter. Also define the shading. 19:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

>.> The stripes match /exactly/ from his old rogue, which should have matched his other images. I'll fix the rest, though. 19:21, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry Mooneh, but I compared this image to his other rogue and the stripes on his old one are still lighter and thinner and there's a few more. Also, lighten up the brown to match his elder image. 19:38, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Try to copy the cave-guard on this one, and add some mud. 23:43, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Amberkit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I luffles this. o.o Comments? 21:45, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Aww :3 Define the ear pink over > there. 22:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little on this <--- ear. 22:20, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the neck shading a bit. Cute Amberkit is cute. <3 23:41, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Since the nose is on the white, could you make the nose pink instead? 00:09, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

The eyes look red. XD Make them a bit more yellowy? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 00:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define where the light is coming from. so cute! 01:09, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Actually...just sorta define all the shading (if you want) x3 02:48, April 8, 2012 (UTC)