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Boulder (Alt W) - For Evaluation
Comments? I can't do shading, so can any warrior help? Also, BG Color? Tigertastrophe (talk) 17:58, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

Size the image down, please. The heading needs to be Boulder (Alt W)- For Evaluation, since you are a kit. 18:01, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

This also needs to match his other alts in the set, since this is from TUG. What program do you use? To make the background transparent, find the magic wand tool, select outside of the lineart, and hit delete. To add shading, pick a color and paint it on, set it to multiply (if you aren't using layers, please use them, they are useful) and lower the opacity. Then blur/smudge with the tools to make it a gradient. 18:09, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

I use the Paint Program on Windows. It doesn't have layer options. Tigertastrophe (talk) 21:05, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

You should use a program that allows you to use layers, such as GIMP (which is free), Photoshop, and Pixlr (also free). 21:41, May 18, 2019 (UTC)

When you do get layers, add shading and blur the colors a little.

00:52, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

I already tried downloading GIMP, but apparently my PC doesn't have enough space, even though I've deleted alot of files.. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:17, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Oo, wait hold up. Pixlr editor works, alrighty gimme a few days and I'll fix this warrior up. It may be late since I have exams, but I'll try otherwise. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:20, May 19, 2019 (UTC)

Where do I place the shading? I checked apprentice tutorials, and it's not there. Tigertastrophe (talk) 16:09, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

here you go! 16:28, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Actually, the Tutorials don't show how to shade the new warrior blank, just the old one. Here and here  are some examples. 22:45, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, Greenflower. Tigertastrophe (talk) 23:14, May 20, 2019 (UTC)

finished and re uploaded. Couldn't find the delete for bg. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:05, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Rename this to File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png. You need to use the lineart of the shorthair warrior blank. 00:33, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Pixlr should have the magic wand tool. You need to select outside of the lineart, and press delete. Don't get me? See the Tutorials, I think they have a tutorial on making the background transparent. 00:39, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Ahh forgot we got new blanks. I apologize for that. Also, I renamed it for you. Please continue to reupload over File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png. And would you like one of the files? I have the elder and rogue files if you wanna match the colors from them. Speaking of which, there shouldn't be any stripes on the chest and paler parts around his muzzle and eyes. 03:15, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, Vector! Any of them would be fine tbh. And I'll be sure to check AP. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:14, May 22, 2019 (UTC)

Reup. Maybe I just shouldn't be making charart, I'm still a newbie to all this stuff.. Tigertastrophe (talk) 00:07, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

This should be uploaded under File:Boulder.warrior.alt2.png not what yoy uploaded it as you have to keep replacing the previous version.  Ellie  life is an illusion 00:23, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Make the background transparent, and the stripes are a gray-green color on his other alts. If you need help with the background, just ask. 01:08, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge everything. And don't thumb your images! 01:59, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

the earpink looks blurry and out of place 14:24, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

the shading source seems to be contradictory, as there is shading on <-- side (his back) but also on --> side (front of his chest)

Purdy (Alt E) ~ CBA
okay, thought I wasn't gonna be able to do this without a mouse but here we go  Ellie  life is an illusion 00:07, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

i can’t really see the lineart since the fur’s so dark, but it might just be my phone’s night setting... there’s also a blank few pixels near the tail. 02:21 Tue May 21

I can see the lineart just fine on my desktop. I usually find that with my phone, it tends to black out darker chararts. 03:06, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

I'm not seeing the blank pixels??  Ellie  life is an illusion 10:24, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

i also see the linear art and i dont see the blank pixels. regardless, minor but can you add some shading to the inner ear? 10:29, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

The light is coming from the front so I don't think there would be much there from what's already there? Could you redline what you mean as I might be misunderstanding lol  Ellie  life is an illusion 11:24, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

eh, its okay if you leave it as is. i was thinking maybe add a line of shading on the edge of the inner ear (like the pink part) on the left side cuz it looks a lil flat as is 12:32, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, I think I can do that. I'll re-up when I'm home.  Ellie  life is an illusion 12:42, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Shouldn't the fur be just as ragged as the previous version? Not sure if that's required. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  18:21, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Given that the discussion seems to be leaning in favor of the artist deciding for themselves, I don't think we can force Mink to change the lineart. However, I think he could use a bit more ragged fur, since that's something Purdy is always described with and seems to be a major thing for him. ​​

The lineart is the same lineart as File:Purdy.elder.png. I can add more fur but I wanted it to match what the lineart of his elder look like.  Ellie  life is an illusion 18:47, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Hm, if it matches, then it matches. I just think he could use a bit more raggedness in general, but technically you do have the same lineart. ​​

If it's alright, I'd like to leave the lineart as is since it matches.  Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:17, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Ups, added the shadow to the ear that was suggested <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 12:18, May 22, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 13:22, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (OT) (Ki) - For Approval
I tried <span style="">19:24 Tue May 21

Can you define the light on the --> ear <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:19, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

Really nice! Can you define the shading on the head (where it touches the shoulder/neck) and perhaps on the foreleg? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  22:00, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the face in general?

I'll get to this ASAP. I have two papers due on Sunday that I put off cause I was waiting for feedback on what I have so far. <span style="">23:54 Fri May 24

Bird That Rides the Wind (E) - For Approval
All colors from the loner file. I'll rough up the stripes in a bit. <span style="">19:26 Tue May 21

Can you define the facial shading just a bit? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 21:20, May 21, 2019 (UTC)

See Cherrypaw. <span style="">23:54 Fri May 24

Mumblefoot (E) - CBA
this one was hard lol 16:57, May 22, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Is there any way you could tweak the lineart at the base of the tail? It seems to go abruptly downwards and the style doesn't really match the rest of the lineart around it... maybe just add another patch or two of ragged fur to round it out? I can't word today, so I'm sorry if this makes no sense. Could you also either darken or define the shading? ​​

From the looks of it, the lineart was cut off. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 19:19, May 22, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded! 21:55, May 22, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Smooth out the tail lineart and define the pupil in the eye. 22:25, May 22, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 00:28, May 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

Can you crop the image a bit on the <--- side? 00:33, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a little bit

reuploaded 21:39, May 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

CBA? 13:17, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Tommy (Ki) - CBA
I love this design! Not sure if I needed to add his little captain america thing since it would be hidden by his foreleg. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  23:35, May 22, 2019 (UTC)

It's canon that for all of the kittypets I designed, their owners were Marvel fans lol. There should be more of the paler brown on the muzzle and above the nose (unless it's hidden by shading), and two layers of different colored texture. The darker texture is #2B1601 (rgb(43,22,1)) and set to multiply with 13% opacity. The lighter one is #EFBA82 (rgb(239,186,130)) and set to add with 4% opacity. Neither of the textures are on the white in case you didn't know. And would you like the file, too? Otherwise, this is very good ^^ 00:19, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

I would love the file, thanks! Do I give you my email? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  00:23, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Yep! Leave it on my talk page and I'll send it right over :) 00:24, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Vec! I think I got the texture to at least be close enough? - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  01:28, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 13:18, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Boulder (E) ~ For Approval
Dunno how I feel about the texture. Also the torn ear is different on each image lmao. 04:29, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth the shoulder shading a touch?

Reups 19:37, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Rushtail (RC) (E) ~ For Approval
ehh

Why does he have stripes? Is that texture? 13:01, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

um he's literally said to be a tabby? and i matched the apprentice

This one has stripes, Potato. It's the WindClan Rushtail that doesn't.

Lol sorry, read too fast  18:33, May 23, 2019 (UTC)​

Longtail (E) - For Approval
forgot the scar, sorry will reup 05:09, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

I thought the discussion on matching lineart was basically that important features should all have matching lineart? Is it possible that you could match the lineart from his brown elder image? I also think you forgot the torn ear. ​​

oh yeah, i tried but i literally cant download the image for some reason (idk if anyone else is having this problem but whenever i download an image from wiki its a corrupt file), so i did my best but really idk what to do unless someone sends me the linear art in pc 05:37, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

reup will remove waste next 09:54, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

I might have the loneart for this, I'd have to check hut if I do I can send it through. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 13:05, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Might just be my screen, but there appears to be a lil gray above his left torn ear. You remember the past  at the expense of the future.  01:46, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

reup i said i would remove the waste... 08:15, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you adding shading depth, it all looks flat. Maybe some more light on the haunch <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:24, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Burnt's shading never looks flat, and this isn't an exception. Also, have you gotten the lineart yet? If not, I can give it a shot and see what I get.

I haven't been on my laptop yet, it's charging currently but I'll be hopping on after this movie I'm watching and will see. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:44, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

i havent, jayce ^^ 01:20, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Sorrelstripe (Queen) - For Approval
Time to slink back into cat art hell now I've fixed my programs :) <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 15:58, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

Can you lessen the belly shading some? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:25, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I don't really like to just say it's fine much when possible but I feel like the belly shading is ok, my minor character queen has roughly the same amount. I'll do it no problem though if someone else agrees with you, Mink. ;; <font color="#4c4c4c" face="Segoe Script" >Squidward <font color="#666666" face="Segoe Script" >Plays <font color="#7f7f7f" face="Segoe Script" >All  <font color="#999999" face="Segoe Script" >Star. <font color="#b2b2b2" face="Segoe Script" >I <font color="#d9d9d9" face="Segoe Script" >Am <font color="#e5e5e5" face="Segoe Script" >Reshiram. <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Segoe Script" >I Am Elegance. 17:07, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

meh it looks fine to me, sorry mink. 18:18, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Starlingfeather (Elder) - For Approval
o- owo?? 22:20, May 23, 2019 (UTC)

O-OWO??? this is super cute!! maybe darken the texture a little more? 23:55, May 23, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel

The texture is rougher and the base is darker on the StarClan. 00:31, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the light source? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:26, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Looks like it's coming from the top at a diagonal angle. 17:28, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

I see some where its coming from, I'm asking them to define it more. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:55, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! 13:58, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Zack (K) ~ For Approval
winging it i guess (adding collar next reup) 08:29, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly curve that shoulder shading upwards to match the shape of his shoulder? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:10, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

reups got the collar on 14:22, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you curve the shoulder shading a tad more to the right? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 14:23, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

reups 15:29, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the shoulder shading and the haunch shading (the part next to the tail). Also I think gray from the tail is leaking onto the hind leg farthest from us. :) - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:50, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Dark-colored and white rogue (Ro) ~ For Approval
i have no idea what to name this lol

i think the belly shading should be on the top by the light source 14:20, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Could you define the overall shading? Also, I'm not 100% what the naming is myself, but we can take care of that after everything is said and done. No need to worry about it now, since it's not really super important.

reups if the patch on the back looks darker, it's probably because it's all in shading but all the patches have the same base colour

Antfur (W) ~ For Approval
19:38, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Might be the way this blank is posed, but I think his cheek scars should be there. 02:49, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Perhaps the very end of the longest scar can show but that might be a stretch. - <font style="background:yellow">JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  02:53, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Brown tabby (KP) - For Approval
Not sure if it's named correctly, but that can be taken care of when everything else is said and done. I miiiight have gone a little overboard with the smudging, and I do not care. I like this.

This is so freaking cute omg!!! Could you define the facial shading a tad? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 22:17, May 24, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Also tweaked a couple other things that were bugging me.

Dark-colored kit (Ki) ~ For Approval
I'll define the paler muzzle soonish, I can see that its hard to see <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 01:59, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Doesn't this have to be in grayscale since this is from a manga? 02:31, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

From what the section told it wasn't a manga one? <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:05, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

I see it now, I'll fix it on my next upload. <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color:#000080; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.22em; font-size:90%"> Ellie <span style="font-family:comic sans ms; color:#25383C; text-shadow:#737CA1 0.2em 0.1em 0.19em; font-size:110%"> life is an illusion 03:09, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

Needletail (Alt. W) - For Approval
03:30, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

what alt is this?

probably the shattered sky cover alt? 05:14, May 25, 2019 (UTC)

I think it's the alt where she's shown without her white chest fur. I don't know if that's counted as enough of an error to warrant the alt, though.

Gray and white warrior ~ For Approval
it's texture not stripes