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Brackenfur (A) for approval
hi this is beewing culd u plz approve my brackenpaw? thx

Beewing Buzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

The color isnt quite right make him more brown and Make his stripes more distinct if that makes sense. Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:39, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... You need ear colour. And Ashshadow's right. Too golden... Lavenderi 22:07, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Also, you always need to sign with the four ~ -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:16, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

He is too yellow. You should work on it or else it will get declined--  Night shine   ♥  02:50, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

It's only been 4 days. Give her alittle while onger, seeing as she also has a life. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ  00:25, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wait! she allready has one up on the bottem! Lovepaw My Talk!  02:00, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenpaw improved!

Beewing Buzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice but i have to say that this is over the limit, also please look at Brackenfur warrior image. Lovepaw My Talk!  01:59, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Beewing, as Echopaw said this is over the limt and you already put him up for approval in another place on this page. You need to use the same thing over again until what you want approved is approved. Please put this is your other Brackenfur (A) for approval. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 02:04, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Moving this to its proper section; Beewing; next time, just upload over the old image with changes, and post in the same section. -- Bramble 02:32, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

how about now?

Beewing Buzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

He still looks pretty yellow. His warrior image is more brown -

And also, please sign with the four ~ -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:01, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

How about this? and nightfall what do u mean by signing with the four?

Beewing Buzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that's much better. And I mean type four of these ~ after whatever you've typed. If you do that, your siggie will show up after whatever you've typed. (Or click the siggie button on the edit bar)-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:34, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

ok, but i dont have a siggie well nightshine made 1 for me but i'm not sure how to make it appear on my posts even if i do type four ~'s but is brackenpaw approved?

Not yet. He looks too redish now and his earpink is too pink. Also reupload images over the same file name. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 01:27, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

OMG. I love it! Thats very much how a imagine Brakenfur (I didn't know he was tabby though)! I just said it near the beginning of this post bit, but I love it! -Owlblaze Oakstar 09:32, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow has said it all. And Owlblaze, I'm not getting on to you at all, I just wanted to tell you that whenever you leave a comment on someone's charart, be sure to leave some critique too. It makes everyone feel good when someone says they love their work, but they also need to know how to improve it. Again, I'm not getting on to you :) -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 17:55, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

OK. Well, I would change the stripe a bit on his head that looks like an eyebrow. It matches the warrior piccy, but in my opinion, it looks kinda.... odd. Just my opinion though. -Owlblaze Oakstar 04:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, how about this time?

Beewing Buzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Beewing i removed the ones that or not for approval and put the newly done one up there. Echo Rocks! My Talk!  19:05, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

 Reuploaded 

Beewing Buzz Like A Bee 21:29, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This looks much better. Just make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and then it should be good. Also, upload on the same file name instead of uploading on a new name each time, it helps to save space on the wiki. -- Icy -chan Olympics  of   2010!! 22:16, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Beewing Buzz Like A Bee 22:46, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the hind leg farthest from us LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 05:01, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

the earpink color still bothers me. Make it more of a reddish color. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:45, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined... ✐S aN  dY  09:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Patch (KP) For Approval
Here's Patch. I used Mousetalon's Tutorial for the shading, and used another approved image for the eyes. Constructments? -- Night whisker 98 Rawr!

This is good! Make the ear pink smaller and blur the patches on the tail some more--  Night shine   ♥  22:30, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! 23:39, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

What? When was Patch a kittypet? He was a rogue, then a warrior of SkyClan. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:54, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is patch from Tigerstar and Sasha. This is really good Nightwhisker. Maybe darken the nose a little bit. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:59, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - The eyes look very pixelated. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 01:53, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! *face palm* Sorry Nightwhisker, I completely fogot about him! Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:07, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm glad my tutorials helped! Maybe blur the black patch on the head more. ♥Mouse♥ ♥Heart♥  16:43, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this ok? I tried to fix the eyes, but I don't know if they're ok now... -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! 20:32, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blending. ∑✐+ᖱ = ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ  20:57, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

He's nice! Blur the shading on the collar, and as Mosswhisker said, the eyes look very pixelated. Make the different colours of the eye pixels more similar. Also, I see a patch on the left haunch (the one we can't see) that is completely white, while the rest of the white fur is gray. Darken the shading there. I love your patches, maybe add one or two more to the top of the tail and the tail-tip? It's not nessicary, though; this is very good! B a  t  w  i  n  g   ♥  21:13, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Aside from what Bluestar said, all I can see is that there's an odd patch of gray on the top of his right (for us) haunch. insan TA STE  THE  RAIN BOW  eu lar  21:15, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Patch's image in the manga doesn't look like this- he was black and had a white belly, paws, and tail-tip. I have the book. Rain whisker  22:30, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look kinda dark, you have to cncentrate on them to find the pupils, and they stad out a lot. Maybe brighten them a tad? Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  23:30, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ok Rainwhisker, then should I start over? -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! 20:45, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Don't start over, just make the eyes a lighter shade of green. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 

No, about the problem of him being black with a white underbelly, paws, and and tail-tip, i can fix the eyes... -- Night whisker 98 Rawr! 22:51, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, only because we have an actual picture reference. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:04, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry about that. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ  00:22, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

The transition from white and black needs to be blurred as well as the ear pink also I dont see any shading. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 01:07, February 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * In addiion to Ash's comment, the ear pink needs blending and the eyes look a little dark ∑✐+ᖱ =  ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ  14:41, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur in his white points! XD! Fawnstorm 16:39, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlights and blur the transitions. Also, the ear pink looks a bit wonky, if you could blur that and make it neater. XD Mistyheart 14:52, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

I have no idea what wonky means, so I tried to fix the earpink the best I could. Reuploaded. Is this better? -- Luck whisker I can feel the clouds beneath my paws!!15:09, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:37, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 18:18, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, like the overall shape of it. Try filling in that little chunk of black with pink. (I'll make a diagram if you need me too)-- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 22:58, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better Night? -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 20:14, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yep :) But his pelt looks kinda purpleish, especially on his face. I'd run the burn tool over all the black parts of his body a few times-- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 20:17, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Purplish How? And I can't seem to fix it on pixlr... can you help me Nightfall?-- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 21:25, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry Night. No that I'am on a different computer, it looks fine. But darken the shading more on the face, and lighten the eyes-- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 23:54, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if the changes are showing up? But is this better? -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 18:42, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was reading Escape from the forest, and I noticed that the white part of his belly stretches up to his face. I'll see if I can find you an image online... Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:33, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, I couldn't find one online. But the white stretches up to his face like Leafpool's does Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 00:14, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the collar. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:10, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the shading... Anything else? -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 15:18, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

His colar on the top looks smudged and blur the head shading a bit more.-- M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 17:39, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Jake (KP) - For Approval


(M) - ''This should be under the limit seeing as two of the sections are disscussions. If it's over you can take it down.''

Jake is both Scourge's (My favorite cat!) and our famous Firestar's father. What more could you ask for?

Gah this took forever to do! *dies*

Anyways, constructive critisism? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 02:00, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Strange, this isn't how I pictured him. I thought he'd look more like Firestar, since he's his father... But for this image, darken the ear pink. It's really good though! B a  t  w  i  n  g   ♥  02:17, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

He should be more gingery. The markings on his tail and forehead look strange.--  Night shine   ♥  02:19, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, he looks to cream colored. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:06, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

His pelt looks cream, make it a ginger color. Also, he markings do look odd/strange. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ  20:34, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

He looks peachy and cream, like said above, and I thought he was a solid ginger. The tabby stripes looks real cool but I didn't think he had stripes. Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  13:59, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Yay for snow days! I changed the pelt color, eyes, ear pink, and the shading and highlihgts. Better? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:32, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! Make the ear pink more reddish--  Night shine   ♥  22:44, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Fixed ear pink. Is it better? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 23:05, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing, as always, Mosswhisker! The only thing is that the artist of the blanks said that the right ear (for us, left ear for the cat) is turned away so that ear doesn't need ear pink. Seriously though... it's awesome! insan TA STE  <font color="#00CC33">THE  <font color="#0033CC">RAIN <font color="#6633FF">BOW  <font color="#660099">eu lar  23:31, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

He is Firestar;s father, maybe you could make him a bit firey color? Wetty What do you mean they only had 31 flavors?! 00:02, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is AMAZING! Get rid of the ear pink on his left ear and this will be perfect. XD Mistyheart 14:48, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Removed ear pink from our right ear. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 02:11, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

How do you do that kind of fur? It's amazing! Anyways, he seems a little. . . bright. Maybe dull the color a bit. ♥Mouse♥ ♥Heart♥  21:10, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the fur a tad. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:Turqoise">Icestorm 17:14, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. I desaturated the fur. Icestorm, I didn't blur the fur because I used the same texture as I did on Snowstar. Anything else that needs fixed? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:56, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Are his eyes that color? I may be wrong, but aren't they green? I'm probably wrong. I just pictured them green since he's Firestar's father. I'm usually wrong though. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 22:16, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I pictured them green too, but if there isn't a reference, then we can't really assume that LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 22:51, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

There is a dary grayish spot on his shoulder and the base of his tail. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:28, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Fixed discoloration. Better? Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 22:12, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I just noticed that his shoulder's fur seems to stand out. Try to make it more like the rest of his body. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 16:20, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pink-- M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 17:40, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Socks (KP)-For Approval
Here's Ruby's littermate, Socks! He needs some work...comments? Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  13:56, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, do we even need him as a kittypet? We have him as a kit with a collar, but we never saw him as a kittypet older than six moons. Just asking so if I'm wrong please don't get mad. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:06, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

When I had my Ruby (KP) up for approval, this was brought up, and other people said that yes, we would need kittypet images for them. Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  14:08, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, thanks for not getting made at me :) On the image, I can't see anything wrong. P.S who here loves the snow day? M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:19, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

(For the record, I'm loving this snow day! We get off tomorrow and Friday too! And Monday! A six-day weekend!) Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  23:29, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and the tag is the same color as his collar. Make it yellow, like on his kit image-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:21, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading, yellowified tag (if that's a word...) Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  15:34, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's great, Moss. :) Now, darken the shading more then blur it. Ice <font color="#CC0000">Happy Valentines!  01:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I might have made it worse on the leg...whenever I blur it, it gets bigger and darker...suggestions? P.S. I won't be here during this weekend, maybe on Sunday night, when I'm getting back from my reterat :) So I'm pretty much signing off here on this image. Vancou verpath  §USA!§ 23:21, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Are there any further comments? Vancou verpath  17:38, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Should the hind leg that's half hidden from us be white? I thought that was the leg, not the paw Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was the paw, that's what it looks like to me at least. What does everyone else think? I think I'm going to try and redo the shading. Vancou verpath  13:38, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-sorta I made another versoin. Original is on the left. Which one does everone like better? Vancou verpath  14:41, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right. I'm not sure but I agree with Night based on the side we can see. I think that that would be the back part of his leg and not the paw. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:07, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's what I meant. Sorry, I'm not too good at phrasing things like that :) And yes, I like the one on the right. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 18:22, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Patchpelt (W)- for Approval
Take him down if he's over the limit, but I don't think he is. I think he's one of my better ones.Echoheart 11:45, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

The patches on his back and chest don't look much like the ones on his elder image...well they do, except on here they look very much connected, whereas his elder picture's ones are a little less touching...does that make any sense? Also, you might want to add a patch on his front leg...one the elder image you wouldn't see it if it was there. Heartpath Love, Jaggedclaw!  15:38, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hello Echoheart! This is really good! There is a little grey smudge thingy on the patch that covers his face. It might just be me but if you can see it then I knoww I'm not going blind like Jayfeather! XD! Fawnstorm 16:48, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs blending and I can't see much shading. ∑✐+ᖱ = ᶊ⍶ᵰᗫᎽ  17:06, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is there anything else? Echoheart 20:40, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter like his elder image-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:30, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

...Don't know if you saw my comment above there ;) Heartpath  Love, Jaggedclaw!  01:50, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

About your comment Mosspelt, which front leg? And about the image, it's reuploaded. Echoheart 11:52, February 13, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'd say the front leg closest to us. The patches all need blurring a little more and the shading isn't visible on the white areas. ✐S  aN  dY  11:40, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Echoheart 19:06, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the patches (do not smudge them out just smudge the patches) then blur them more. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:Turqoise">Icestorm 17:12, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about this? Echoheart 11:39, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Anybody? Echoheart 23:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, darken the shading on the white fur just a tad bit more, I can tell it's there butI think it should be a bit darker. -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 00:18, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Now what? Echoheart 11:19, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink smaller? It looks a bit big. XD! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 10:39, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made the ear pink smaller. Echoheart 16:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be me, but I still can't see any shading... ✐S aN  dY  09:40, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to make the shading darker. Anything else? Echoheart 12:04, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink a bit brighter? If you do that, I don't see much else that needs doing! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Anything else (again? XD) Echoheart 14:46, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Rose (KP) -For Approval
Well, tell me how bad this is. Angel Paw  11:58, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

It's not bad at all! Fill in the white pixel (on her neck), and blur the highlights. Maplefern May StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 13:07, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is beatiful! <font color="FF99FF">Lovepaw <font color="FF33FF">My Talk!  13:45, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

It's very nice! Well done! Just fill that white pixel. Wetty What do you mean they only had 31 flavors?! 14:29, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! However, the markings on the front and back legs are way different in length. Shorten and blur the front leg markings (http://chinkisiamese.com/siamese_cats_chelsea.jpg) Dark hallows 06:03, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Um the markings are similar to the markings on Lily but I will fix the white pixel tomorrow. Angel Paw  21:58, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights then blur them. (Or you could smudge them out then blur them, I call that the Fuzzy Efect. XD) <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:Turqoise">Icestorm 17:09, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need to be a bit bigger. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:18, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Angel Paw  13:12, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the left part of her back some more--  Night shine   ♥  17:46, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe bring the dark bits on the hind legs up a bit. If she stood up then only her back paws would be brown. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 16:55, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear is too hot pink.-- Quail! <font color="Maroon">People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt.08:29, February 25, 2010 (UTC)


 * Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐S  aN  dY  09:41, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Clovertail (R) - for approval


Wow, its been 2 months I think since I've done an image, so the image is probably not that good. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 20:03, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This isnt bad. I would make the white on her front legs go up higher and darken the earpink. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 21:17, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the background pink?-- M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 19:12, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Pink? I don't know, its white on my computer/gimp. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 21:14, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's a very light pink. I can make it transparent if you want. Dark hallows 23:23, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: And yes, could you do that for me Shady? <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 20:49, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

The white on the front legs still needs to be a little higher and the white underbelly should go up a little faurther. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:30, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Since Shady's not on I could make the background transparent if you want. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:Turqoise">Icestorm 16:41, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I made the white go higher on her front legs, but I didn't on her belly because if Idid, wouldn't it go on her side? <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:03, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

It should go higher on her chest, like her queen image - -- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 00:19, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows this? ♣Gaelic Irish♣

I like it. just blur the shading on her back some more. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:51, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

And she looks a tad gingerish compared to her queen image. Maybe desaturate her a bit? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:40, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

How would I do that? ♣Gaelic Irish♣  05:06, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

If you use pixlr, use the sponge tool set to desaturate. Haikage Ash's Talk 05:09, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

She looks a bit chestnut in this image but in her queen image, she looks browner (^ see above) ^^ <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 16:59, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- How's this? ♣Gaelic Irish♣  22:58, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is a bit bright and it looks like the shading comes off her chest a tiny bit. other than that I really like it. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:00, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Quince (Q)- For Approval
I hope I'm not going over the image limit cuz if I am I'll take it down and put it up later. Well, here she is. How is she? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 23:10, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit. There are two discussions.--  Night shine   ♥  23:26, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

There are three discussions up so this in within the limit. Blur the shading and highlights more. Ashshadow I'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:38, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink darker. And add shading to the ear and paw that's not facing us. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:Turqoise">Icestorm 23:43, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops I didn't see that. Blur the highlights and shading.--  Night shine   ♥  23:54, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's this? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 00:08, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks magenta. Also, Blur the highlights and shading more. But this is good for your first one! Maplefern Carrying the torch... 20:52, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I redid the shading and highlights. Earpink too. This good? -- Luckflight Kiss Me I'm Irish 22:19, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

She should have a collar LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 00:21, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights more. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:Turqoise">Icestorm 17:07, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Her right arm seems too dark. Lighten it a bit--  Night shine   ♥  23:05, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I fixed the shading, highlights and arm. I'm having trouble with the collar. Any tips on how to make it on pixlr? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 22:33, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I suggust making the collar in paint then coloring it in pixlr. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:44, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I think it'd be easier to do it all in pixlr, but of course it's your choice. If you do it in pixlr just take the pencil tool on 1 or 2 pixel size, and just... draw the collar. X3 <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 04:35, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad.  Saint Ice   ♣  02:10, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I just started over and made it a whole lot better. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:11, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's the collar look? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 21:20, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit thin and the tag needs to be smaller. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:22, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: thickened the collar.

The shading needs more blurring--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  00:40, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Try and copy the collar on the kittypet image. User:QuailflightTheCat ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...05:43, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: blurred shading and fixed collar. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 15:13, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. Sorry but it dosen't look that.........natural. If you see what I mean? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:53, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: better? -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 16:24, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Diesel (KP) ~ For Approval


I liked how he turned out. ^-^ Comments? -- GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 23:55, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Really nice :) Just remove the earpink from the right ear (it's facing away from us, so it doesn't need pink), and the pupils look a bit odd. I really like the stripes, though! <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:56, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the shading a little bit. And fix the ear pink as Insane said. The eyes are cool!--  Night shine   ♥  23:59, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

His stripes are wicked cool. The right eye looks a little strange thought but really good job otherwise :) -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 01:15, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is just in my opinoin but make his pelt lighter. <font color="OO66OO">Echo Rocks! <font color="OO33FF">My Talk!  00:02, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, I really like his pelt color. The only thing I see is that the ear pink should be removed from the right ear-- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 01:47, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. ARG!!! I'M REALLY DUMB NOW! Dx I THOUGHT HE WAS DELETED! Can someone delete the double post? I've lost my MIND xP  GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 23:09, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I deleted the second one--  Night shine   ♥  23:17, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, night. ^-^  GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 23:53, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the pupil, as it isn't solid. This is amazing otherwise, though. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:53, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great!-- Quail! <font color="Maroon">People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt.08:30, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 14:47, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (ki)--For Approval
Here is Poppyfrost! As a kit! My first kit, actually. Comments? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 13:39, February 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * I don't see much shading. ✐S  aN  dY  14:20, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Are the changes showing up? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 16:12, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur thr patches on her head/face some more. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:42, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred patches on face. Comments? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:03, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tad bigger and blur the ginger near the bottom on her left paw--  Night shine   ♥  23:13, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Made ear pink bigger and blurred ginger. Anything else? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:26, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm now the ear pink is too dark. Can you lighten it?--  Night shine   ♥  23:28, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - like that? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:49, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eyes more of a bright blue, they look a little too dark-- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 23:52, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - brightened eye colour. Anything else? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 23:59, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is still too dark--  Night shine   ♥  02:06, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe try to make the colours more... scattered? Crystalpaw *glimmer* 16:22, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I made it the same colour as Well, roughly. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 12:31, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well the ears on kits are so small that you have to change the color a bit. Thats what happened when I made goldenflower as a kit so I suggest that you made it a tad lighter. Haikage Ash's Talk 12:34, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ta-da! Comments? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 15:18, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Better, just make it a tad bigger. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:02, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - made earpink bigger. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 21:50, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 22:48, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white fur some more, or make the highlight on the white fur on the chest a bit brighter. -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 00:16, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened white shading. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 01:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is fine :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 12:56, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but I can't see the Ear Pink that well. Try lightening it! XD! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:11, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? Maplefern Carrying the torch... 16:00, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's perfect!--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  20:03, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 15:49, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Snapper (R) - For Approval
hes done it took me a long time but he is done Iceyfang 17:35, February 18, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

You need to get the rouge blank again, and click on the blank so it makes it full size, then you need to blur the scars and earpink and make the scars and earpink darker. also, color in his eye, and add shading and highlights. (highlights are optional though...) Sorry about my speeling XD -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 17:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, do everything that Nightwhisker said. But, didn't Hiddensun have this reserved?-- LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 22:41, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think she did but she isn't on the table anymore. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:31, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Huh, that's odd. But Iceyfang, you totally messed up the lineart. There is a big chunk missing out of his head, his eye and whiskers are all, blobbish, and scars are not that color. Scars are acually pretty subtle. And yes, Nighthwhisker's right. I think you're gonna have to re-do it again since you colored the thumbnail size instead of the full size, sorry LoveFall Can you feel the love tonight? 04:25, February 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * Hiddensun may have had her reserved but I removed a load of projects that had been up for too long or didn't have dates etc ✐S  aN  dY  20:45, February 19, 2010 (UTC) have b

She doesn't have to redo, I resized it.

 Dark hallows 14:34, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

where his ear is there is no pink, there is some next to it. -- ♥Shine star♥  20:29, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

i did the ear pink Iceyfang 01:06, February 21, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

But it's not even in the ear. It's right under it. You need to darken it, and make it higher. And by the way, I don't have Shattered Peace, but I've read it, and we have a picture reference for Snapper (although I don't remember what he looks like in the book) Just making sure, but does this look like him? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

fixed i also added the torn ear Iceyfang 01:51, February 21, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

It still looks too pink. Make it more of a red pink, not pink red. The scars are too pink, look at Yellowfang for scar color reference. -

Also, the head color looks weird, blur where it connects with the neck Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:56, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

From what I saw in the browse inside, snapper has a white face, underbelly, and tail. His legs weren't white. Haikage Ash's Talk 02:02, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

fixed Iceyfang 02:21, February 21, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The lineart on his head is missing, you need to blur the ear pink, and I seriously think you did something to the eye... Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 20:05, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't make his whole head white just his face. He doesn't really look like a tortoiseshell.--  Night shine   ♣  23:42, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

He is supposed to be a calico, not a tortie... look at the book. Dark hallows 11:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't have any of the manga/haven't read any.:( But aren't calico and tortie the same thing?--  Night shine   ♣  01:28, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Calico is the same as tortoiseshell and white, but it's not the same as jsut tortoiseshell. Tortoisshell is the dark pelt with ginger markings, and tortoiseshell and white is usually white with ginger and black markings along their back and side. I agree though, this doesn't really look tortoiseshell and white to me Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:05, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

They aren't the same thing... or, well it depends on where you live. But this http://static.gotpetsonline.com/pictures-gallery/cat-pictures-breeders-kittens-rescue/calico-pictures-breeders-kittens-rescue/pictures/calico-0107.jpg is a calico, this is a tortioseshell http://www.petrefuge.com/Cats%20Tina/Tortie%20Natasha%20on%20sink%20Jan%2008.jpg Dark hallows 00:30, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I remember Viki saying something about calicos and tortoiseshells not being the same if you lived in the UK, on a chat. Either way, this doesn't really look like a tortoiseshell and white, or a calico Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:09, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

i fixed it by the he does have white legs if you look at the cover at 3rd manga of the ravenpaw sreies then you can see he has white legs Iceyfang 19:38, February 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The Erins are known for inconsistencies. From what I could tell in the first book he didn't have white legs, however, this could've changed. Either way his head isn't completely white and there are still flecks of color on his legs. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:32, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

The scars are kind of obscuring the face. I don't know if you want to fix that...-- Quail! <font color="Maroon">People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt.08:32, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W)-For Approval
Here she is! I know she dosen't look much like her Medicine Cat image but I'll happily improve it! Her eyes are copied directly off her medicince cat image and her scars are in the same places (thanks for your advice on that topic guys!). The Featherstar thing is a disscusion thingy so this is the 35th image. Comments? <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 14:19, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think that this is the 36th image. If it's not you should lighten her pelt a little. Haikage Ash's Talk 14:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I got the colour from her Medicine Cat image. And Timberfur has got CBA so shall I keep it on or take it of? <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 14:59, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well I would say take it off because as far as I can tell Bramble doesn't want more than 35 images on the page( the message at the top of the page). I'm not really sure though. Haikage Ash's Talk 15:03, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ruby's got CBA as well, so I'd think it could stay. Image-wise, the eye is freaking me out, and you need to darken the ear pink/scars and blend the highlights more. ♪  B  a  t   ♫  15:13, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

There are a good amout of images that would be taken off later today, i'm just going by the notice. It's not my call so image-wise there is a white pixel on her chest. Haikage Ash's Talk 15:16, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, Ashshadow, Fawnstorm's right. The Featherstar section is a discussion, so this should be kept. Also, Swiftpelt withdrew Tallpoppy, so this technically is the 34th image. Anyway, I think her pelt could be lighter, as she is dark gray. You can take the pelt colors from the medicine cat version. Rain whisker  16:19, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I took the pelt colour from her Medicine Cat image though and her eyes to. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 16:25, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred her ear and scars but didn't change the eyes. It was like that on the med cat image. I took the pelt colour from that as well. I know she's a dark grey cat (fave) but I did get it from on there. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 16:31, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

To Rainwhisker: Ruby was archived and approved after I made that comment. The earpink is rectangular make it a bit more triangular. Haikage Ash's Talk 17:56, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Fawny! ^^ To get the darker grey colour, maybe add some more highlights on the body, tail and face, like on the med cat image? And then smudge the body ones together if need be. The tail highlights look great on black cats if they're used like on the med cat image. I love the scars! ^^ Brightfrost  of SunClan...  19:12, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

She still looks very black to me, lighten the pelt more Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 22:17, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I am going to withdraw her guys. Sorry. Misty says that Yellowfang was never a warrior in the books so she said I should. I will carry on if anyone disagrees but I don't think you will. Sorry again. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 19:53, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Well she might not have been seen as a warrior but it was mentioned in BP that she was a warrior before becoming a medicine cat. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:06, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, and Flamewolf is doing Hawkheart's warrior image, but he was never shown as a warrior, just mentioned to be one. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:58, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

So what should I do? <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 10:06, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't say she was never a warrior and I didn't say she should be taken down. I just wanted to know when she was mentioned as a warrior (Thanks Ash!) She's really good, but the eyes look strange. I know you copied them from the med cat image, but I think you should use Icethroat's tutorial for eyes. :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 12:55, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind. I'll change the eyes! <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 12:59, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did the entire thing. She's now a dark grey, got the right eyes, her Ear Pink is less rectanglar. Anything else I missed? <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 16:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

You missed a white pixel near her neck :) Otherwise I see nothing wrong :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 16:40, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I have redone it but it won't let me reupload her without keeping the white pixel which I changed. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 17:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded did it. Comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:02, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Also please take note to the message on my user page. Thanx <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:41, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Her scars need to be a darker pink to match her medicine cat image. Also, her pelt should be more ragged, but this is very good. :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 12:14, February 27, 2010 (UTC)


 * The ear pink is too pale for a dark grey cat. Either make it a darker redish colour or make it more of a greyish-pink colour. Reddish is probably easier. ✐S  aN  dY  15:38, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more :D <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 17:45, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

How do I do that? I'll darken the ear pink, I see what you mean, Sandy, thanks? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:09, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make her eye color more orange-like. Do you think you could make her fur textured like her meddie cat image?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  20:00, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkheart (W)-For Approval


Well, here's my first Charart.I had some trouble with the ear pink and highlighting but other than that I think it looks pretty good.Well you can go ahead and tell me how horrible it looks but,since this is my first charart I think it looks pretty good.I used Nightshine's tutorials and Bluestar's tutorials to learn how to do everything so I'd like to thank them. Flamewolf15 00:11, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Err, where is it? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:13, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Did you upload the file and need help linking it, or have you not uploaded it yet? -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 00:20, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted the image for you--  Night shine   ♣  00:24, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is good for your first image but the lineart is thin in some places and you need to blur the shading. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:38, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Well,I edited it and reuploaded it, but I can't figure out how to insert it into my post. Flamewolf15 01:01, February 22, 2010 (UTC)Well when you edit the section there is an option at the top that allows you to add images to the page. also reupload with the same image name. It saves space on the wiki. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:04, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted it again--  Night shine   ♣  01:05, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks to Nightshine for inserting the image.I thickened the line art in some places and tried to blur the shadowing some more.It'd help if you told specific areas that need blurring. Flamewolf15 01:09, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thats because it all needed blurring. The lineart is still thin mostly on the chest, I could fix it if you'd like. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:14, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I thickened the line art on the chest and between the hanch and the front leg I also blurred everything again and it seems that no matter how many times I try to upload an image it never shows up.  Flamewolf  03:32, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted the file for you. Next time dont take it off the page, just click on it and then upload a new version. Haikage Ash's Talk 11:40, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Okay,well is there any other lineart that needs to be thicker?Is there anymore blurring I need to do?And is there anything else that needs improvement or does he look fine the way he is?  Flamewolf  21:54, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart needs to look like this:. The shading on the back is still too thick and I don't see much shading anywhere else. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:11, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:Is this any better?The shading on the back is darking than the rest because he's facing toward the light source and because that's the way it looked after I blurred it in the editor.  Flamewolf  03:44, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

He looks very pink. He needs to be more brown like his Medicine cat image -  Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:45, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, a lot. Dark hallows 15:30, February 23, 2010 (UTC) ^

So, blur the shading and thinin it, (smooth it too) and make it more brown like | (I fail at making arrows.  Saint Ice   ♣  02:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

My oppinion is that the brown color you picked out looks a little pink or a little purple and the shading along its back needs to be blurred. Moonpelt1786 04:57, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

He needs to be blurred and his pelt is marroon. :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 12:10, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Petal (KP) - For Approval
I need to know how to shade this. Other than that, comments? Critique? Critiquents? My fourth image, and first kittypet. Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 10:35, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Just like you said the shading otherwise its pretty good! Moonpelt1786 14:22, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean by saying you need to know how to shade it, but I'll explain two different ways.


 * Using the burn tool, set the range on highlights, and it will show up on white.


 * Run the tool along the back, the legs, the edges of the head, and the bottom of the tail.

Does that help? Bramble 17:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Is that the shading? It looks like she has stripes. The shading needs to touch the lineart, and to be blurred more Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:54, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes if your shading this dark most of the time you need to blur it with the blur tool. Moonpelt1786 04:52, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedҖ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 10:06, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is still really really dark, try lightening it and blurring. Look at some other kittypets to see how they're shaded as this style isn't very connected. Haikage Ash's Talk 11:35, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, blur the shading and make it more smooth and connected as the others said. For an example of what a light colored kittypet's shading should look like, try Snowdrop. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:34, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 03:56, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

She doesn't look anything like her queen image, as a matter of fact, she doesn't look like her description either. She looks white, not pale gray. And the shading still looks like stripes. Make her pale gray, and lighten and blur the shading a lot. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:59, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

I copied the pale gray colour from the queen image. Will reupload on Tuesday.Җ Ѭ ѳ ѥ  ѯ 06:30, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Whitewing (Ki)--For Approval
This is my first kit! How is it?-- Snowflight  1  Happy V-Day!!  00:41, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad, just darken the eye color and earpink a tad. Haikage Ash's Talk 00:56, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and legs. Good job! ♪  B  a  t   ♫  01:01, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened earpink and eye color. Blurred shading on the back and legs. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Happy V-Day!!  02:28, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail some more--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  02:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the shading on the tail (I actually forgot it all together XP)-- Snowflight  1  Happy V-Day!!  21:49, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  09:54, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Owlstar (W) For Approval
I'm sorry about the hassel with Feathertail but I got Owleyes (also Owlstar) of the the page you gave me so any crittisism??? 23:41, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. After you post please sign with four of ~. Blur the shading--  Night shine   ♣  02:47, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded

How does that look??? Moonpelt1786 04:54, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

More blurring. Dark hallows 15:23, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks...bumpy. Get the brush tool size 3, and smooth the shading in. <font color="#3300CC" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:Turqoise">Icestorm 21:38, February 23, 2010 (UTC)\

Ok thanks!!! Moonpelt1786 02:01, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The lineart is blurred in some places, especially the haunch, and the shading still looks strange. Blur it more without blurring the lineart. Also darken the ear pink, and erase the small black dot underneath his chin. (: ♪   B  a  t   ♫  22:17, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok thanks Bat! Moonpelt1786 04:04, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re did the shading and I earsed the black dot and I changed ear color any comments or critism now???

The earpink is too big and should be either more redish or grayish. The shading isn't quite right either. Try looking at some of the tutorials or other approved warriors. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:54, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Moonpelt but he looks a bit blind. Copy the eyes from Icethroat's tutorial or an approved image.

<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:44, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkend the ear color to a mor reddish color and I changed the eyes but I want to keep the shading because I want it to be a little bit diffrent from the others. Moonpelt1786 04:12, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

What you do is modify a shading stlye and make it your own. I'm not sure if he'll get approved with the shading like this. Haikage Ash's Talk 04:23, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed shading! Moonpelt1786 16:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading at all. There are a few gray pixels on his nose. Can you fill them in with black?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  19:58, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the shading look more like shading! 23:42, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't see any shading. It looks like some line art on his back is a little blurred. Can you fix it?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  23:51, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you extended the whisker. Could you fix that too?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  23:57, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the whiskers and yes they were wrong thanks Nightshine!!! Moonpelt1786  04:04, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) For Approval
I was so proud of my Shadepelt as an apprentice! So I decided to go on doing solid color cats! Like it, or love it? I think it would look better without shading also. And I think I went over 35, but... Don't take this down! Please! Take someother useless message down! ♣Silver thistle  05:22, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading quite a bit! <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 10:07, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Silverthistle, you didn't go over the limit. But please don't call the other chararts and discussion parts on here useless. As for the image, Fawn's right about blurring the shading, and she needs eye white Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 10:08, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear was nicked as an apprentice so should she have a nicked ear in the image? Haikage Ash's Talk 11:51, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Do you all think i'll get it approved soon? Blurred shading ,don't think nick is needed and I don't know how to make a nick on an apprentice, also crossed out words ♣Silver  thistle  14:08, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

She really does need the nicked ear..-- Dark hallows 14:26, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added nicked ear ♣Silver  thistle  15:28, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the nicked ear. -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 21:19, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thickened nick ♣Silver  thistle  03:34, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  19:52, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Silver but the shading on her chest is really dark.Lighten it a bit or blur it. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny 19:55, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened shading ♣Silver  thistle  22:03, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

The Ear Pink is still a bit dark. I can't see it that well. <span style="font-family:Lucida Handwriting; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">Fawny

Reuploaded Lightened ear pink and made more visible ♣Silver  thistle  22:40, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry again Silver but could you make the ear pinka bit lighter? Really sorry! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 09:11, February 27, 2010 (UTC)


 * I swear my screen resolution is messed up as I seem to be seeing things differently from everyone else on a lot of images recently. Sorry for the premature CBA call (again). I'll try and sort that out... ✐S  aN  dY  09:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Its okay Sandy! I just saw it when you put CBA up! Sorry! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:50, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened ear pink. Also, I will be gone from the dates March 5th-March 13th, so don't expect me to do anything between and on thoose dates. ♣Silver thistle  16:23, February 28, 2010 (UTC)


 * No need for you to apologise. 'twas my fault. ✐S  aN  dY  15:55, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A)- for approval
Nothing special... she just needed to be done. Dark hallows 15:21, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely. (: Just blur the shading on the tail and the bit near her hindquarters. ♪   B  a  t   ♫  23:07, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

She looks a bit dark compared to her warrior image. Try lightening it witth the dodge tool Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:35, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yes Goldfall is right she looks more brown than her warrior image. Her warrior image is mor of a tan or a light sand color( something like that). Moonpelt1786 18:15, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) For Approval


I'm back with a new charart! And (luckily) this one is about 1,000 times better then Icicle. This is 37 but 22 of the things were discussions so technically this is 35. I just want to say thatnks to Ashshadow for some great advice and help and to al of the turtorial authors, you were very helpful. Anyways, quistions? Comments? -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:11, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. <font color="Lime" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:green">Saint Ice 23:23, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? i learned an important lesson for the next time I do a tabby:shade FIRST! Then you can do the tabby markings. -- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:40, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I put it near the top again. The shading needs some more burring and the stripes need to be thickened a bit more--  Night shine   ♣  01:41, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

You're actually supposed to do the stripes before shading so that everything is shaded equally. In addition to what Nightshine said make the stripes a little longer. Haikage Ash's Talk 01:44, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Gah1 I accidentaly deleted the file! It migt take me a while but I'll get her back up soon.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:47, February 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm going to have to disagree Ash - I always do my shading first and use the burn tool to add stripes resulting in the same evenly shaded effect without the overblurred stripes because of trying to blur the shading. Anyway, this is good Artimas, just make everything more polished. Make sure there aren't gaps in the shading, so it looks consistent, and make your stripes a little thicker. ✐S  aN  dY  22:42, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I forgot about burning the stripes on. My comment only applies if you paint the stripes on. Did you check your recyling bin for the sandpaw file? Haikage Ash's Talk 02:25, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas, if you just save the image from this site (Right click the image above and select 'save as') then you can get it that way. For the image, I can't say much that the others haven't already said, so, yeah. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:34, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

You guys are life savers! I'll be back in just a minute. Hopefully.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'm back. i tried to do everything you guys said. How does it look?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:38, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are a bit too dark and I dont see that many stripes on her tail. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  03:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is this good?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:19, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Icicle (Ki) - For Approval
Since one topic is discussion, this shouldn't be over the page limit. Although I lightened the gray from what it was originally, I think that it's still too dark...comments and suggestions? -- Icy -chan Happy  St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 23:00, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with you about the gray. maybe dodge it a bit. Haikage Ash's Talk 23:02, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  23:06, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say, define the stripe and white chest a bit more so they look like markings... now they kinda look like highlights that are not blurred enough. I think the gray looks fine, but that's my opinion. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:27, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Perhaps lighten the gray a smidge. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 01:19, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the gray and blurred the shading some more, but I'm not sure how to define the markings. How should I do that? -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 15:46, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, well when I did her this is what i did. I made the markings a very pale gray. That made them easier to blur and it was still very distinct.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:33, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

The fur color is pale gray...how do I define the markings that I already have? -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 16:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

What I mean is a grey that is almost white but I think for what you have now, it is very defined. Maybe you should blur some more?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:45, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Clawface (A) - For Approval
Clawpaw, I like that name. The character himself is a different story. Comments? Haikage Ash's Talk 03:15, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

He looks great! Just blur the ear pink, and lighten the pelt a little Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:19, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you night. I blurred the earpink more and lightened the pelt a bit. Anything else? Haikage Ash's Talk 03:25, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Er, his warrior image is still a good bit lighter: Other than lightening it I can't see anything wrong, though. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:31, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from his warrior version, my highlights just arent as bright. I can still lighten it if you think it's too dark. Haikage Ash's Talk 20:35, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, you probably should. But I have a question, why doesn't he have any battle scarrs on his warrior image? His descriprion says he's a battle scarred tom Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 21:48, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I was wondering that too but figured it would wait until we had another tweak week. I'll get to lightening the image now. Haikage Ash's Talk 21:54, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Haikage Ash's Talk 22:00, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (D) For Approval
I tried a different eye style this time! But, I think I'll keep sticking to my original after this. Comments? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. Haikage Ash's Talk 03:19, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this any better? Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:35, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a little bit, or brighten the highlights. Vancou verpath  14:46, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Are the changes showing up? Man, I stink at white cats. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 18:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes the changes are showing up, and this is good, you don't stink at white cats Night!!!! As for the image, it's great. I wish I could approve this... It's awesome... -- Nighty Meh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 15:20, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine to me. CBA? ✐S aN  dY  09:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (A) - For Approval
I can't believe no one's done this! Comments?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  03:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

There are some stripes that are so dark, they look almost red. Lighten those, and lighten the ear pink too. This is really good! Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:36, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened ear pink and I tried to lighten some dark stripes--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  03:48, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, the tail stripes are extremes: the shaded parts are way too dark, and the highlight is too bright. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 01:34, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I adjusted the shading and highlights--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  01:47, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  19:56, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This looks good to me. CBA? ✐S aN  dY  09:58, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Ki) - For Approval
Evanphoto 11:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice! But the shading isn't very noticeable, can you make it darker or add highlights? Also, add neck shading, and maybe make the white less bright, more pale gray. Vancou verpath  14:45, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 16:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

make the earpink a little bigger and darken the shading on his white parts a bit more. Haikage Ash's Talk 16:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make the earpink larger and darken his shading on the white parts more. Fire-★  22:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 13:23, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

His chest looks cream coloured. Go to a greyish white instead of a creamy white. Maplefern Carrying the torch... 16:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

His warrior version looks creamish too, but maybe lighten the cream if you can. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:34, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsetail (W) - For Approval
*sigh* Patched cats are so hard to shade T^T Constructments? -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  19:19, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like it a lot! But the patches look kind of too light, (maybe that's not the right word) and they look like part of the shading. Perhaps either lighten the shading, or darken the patches. Goldfall Meet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:21, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the patches a bit. I don't want to make them too dark because her description said that her patches were a very pale gray. -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  19:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her white parts a bit more, the shading there looks a little distinct. <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:32, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  21:27, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  15:44, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐S aN  dY  15:55, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Shadow (Lo) - For Approval


I really need to lay off the loners. But, she was easy to do. One section is a discussion, so this should be #35. Comments? ♪  B  a  t   ♫  00:12, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with it...  Saint Ice   ♣  00:18, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little smaller--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  00:21, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight more if possible. Haikage Ash's Talk 15:48, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Icewing (Q) - For Approval
My first white cat. I know she looks pale grey, but I copied the colour from Icewing's warrior image: So what do you think? :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 12:08, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's good!! Blur the shading some more and darken the ear pink. Can you center the pupil of her left eye?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  19:54, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Other than what Nightshine said, I see nothing wrong with it. :) Good job. -- Luckflight Happy St. Patty's Day! 20:54, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Misty. I haven't done a white queen yet. I've done white warriors, just not white queens. All I can say is make thr Ear Pink a tad lighter and, like Nightshine said, blur all the shading. I can't see any shading on the front leg farthest from us. This is really good though! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:49, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Do I lighten or darken the earpink? :3 Nightshine said to darken it and Fawnstorm said to lighten it... <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 14:41, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I think it's fine as it is... Just sort the eye out as Nightshine said, and blur the shading. ✐S aN  dY  14:44, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading and I sorted out the eye. :) <span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; color;Purple; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Purple;">♫ Misty ♫ 17:47, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sunstar (D) - For Approval
Oh gosh, this took a long time to shade. I tried to copy Goldencloud's gray shading style as best I could, and I had to use a black airbrush since if you burn yellow it turns orange... anyways. Constructments? <font color="lime" style="background:Black">♫ insaneular ♫ Down at Fraggle Rock! 15:44, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really good! XD But I think you should blur the shading a bit more. Echoheart 16:43, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Lighten the tail shading a tiny bit--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  19:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any better? insaneular   Talk  20:05, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wooowwwww! ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...20:07, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong! The stripes are perfect!--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  20:08, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is...perfect. I don't see ANYTHING wrong with it! Great job Insane!-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:21, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The space between his legs is yellow. Besides that this is great! Haikage Ash's Talk 22:42, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow. That was really dumb of me. Thanks for pointing that out. Anything else? insaneular   Talk  16:18, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, this looks awesome. Comments before approval? -- Icy -chan Happy   St. Patrick's   Day! ♣ 16:33, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I just have a question ,this looks great but is the background supposed to be blakc or clear or what? Because people say to have a clear background but so many pictures have black, blue, or anothert color for their background. This is really confusing me,can someone explain?-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:36, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Harespring (A) - For Approval
Here's Harespring as an apprentice. Comments/Criticism? -- Rain whisker  17:31, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see any shading. Go and put some on. Or maybe it's just my computer... ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...18:51, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's just your computer or a style your not used too because I can see shading. Darken the earpink a little. Haikage Ash's Talk 18:56, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (A) - For Approval
Decided to do an easy one this time. Comments?

This is great, Goldenpaw, but, however, you forgot to use your signature on your comment. I would add more shading. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮ <font color="Maroon">We are the World...19:46, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! Darken the tail shading some more--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  19:47, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

And also make the whole thing darker. Right now he looks dark gray but he is supposed to be black. His warrior image is a lot darker--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  19:52, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but he was never seen as an apprentice; it was mistakenly put in his name list but his first appearance was as a warrior :( Maybe this can be someone else though. If you darken it, maybe Reedwhisker?  insaneular    Talk  19:56, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm assuming Smokefoot was introduced to make up for still having Smokepaw in the allegiances in Starlight-Sunset, so the Smokepaw must of been Smokefoot. Gοlδεn pαω 20:04, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wasn't Smokepaw the cat that fell to his death, or is he from a different clan? Haikage Ash's Talk 20:11, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

That's the common confusion, but Smokepaw and Smokefoot are two different cats... insaneular   Talk  20:13, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Two different cats with two different fur colors. If Smokefoot was apprenticed after Sunset, he would have less than 8 moons of apprenticeship, which is way too short compared to other apprentices we've seen. Gοlδεn pαω 20:16, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

So will this be changed to Reedwhisker?--  Night s  h  i  n  e  ♣  20:20, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

To stop some debate from starting, I don't see why not. I just need to change the eye color. Gοlδεn pαω 20:22, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Um..his eye is kind of weird. I see a lot of white but no black.-- Artimas Hunter Welcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

There's only one pixel of white. I switched around the shades of his eye, so the black will hopefully show up better. -- Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 17:01, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Stonefur (Ki) - For Approval
Okay, so Molekit was an utter disaster but maybe Stonekit will fare slightly better. ''Note: I am aware that the warrior image has scars, but he would not have had battle scars as a kit. Also, I am aware that the warrior image has highlights, but I never user highlights with the kit blanks.'' Constructments? ✐S aN  dY  12:19, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is so cute! ^^ The colour is perfect. However, maybe make the ear pink visible, (a bit 'brighter' in the middle, so the pink is easier to see) like his warrior image? And also, aren't grey cats supposed to have darker grey noses on their chararts? That's what I did with Mistykit. The shading is lovely. :) Brightfrost  of SunClan...  12:39, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I agree Frosty. XD! Make his Ear Pink a but lighter as well. Even though he is a grey kit make a bit more visible. XD! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; color;Cyan; background:Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Cyan;">Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:43, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudtail (Ki) - For Approval
Here's Cloudtail as a kit. (: I know I was supposed to put up Swiftbreeze (Q) but some art program didn't save the changes I added to her. After this gets approved I'll put her up. Comments?  Saint Ice   ♣  15:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, Icestorm:) But there is blurred lineart on his forelegs and his left eye (our left), and he looks crosseyed. Move one of the eye highlights to the other side of the pupil. -- Ŧ∆ķ მ♰§  ƱოΣ  15:49, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Hawk. (: These changes better show up, or -grabs a torch-  Saint Ice   ♣  16:11, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefur (A) - For Approval
Okay. feel free to comment on this however you like, I think it sucks too. How can I improve it? (This is my first time doing this kind of thing, so please excuse me if I put this in the wrong place) Crystalpaw *glimmer* 16:52, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Why won't the picture show up?

I fixed it. You need to upload the image then put the link here. ✐S aN  dY  16:57, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

And please sign with ~ ✐S  aN  dY  16:57, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (wa) - for approval


O god this is terible :(. Sorry about icicle Icethroat! I checked this like five hundred times and I bet that someone still has this. Is her okay. Oh and he's windclan. M I N N O W C L A W O'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 17:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)