Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Accepted 223

Rain (E) ~ Approved
I forgot how i did his toeh lol --

07:55, 4/19/2019

Define the shading on the legs and tail a bit more? 14:58, April 19, 2019 (UTC)

Reups --

16:43, 4/19/2019

With your light source, the belly shading should be on the <-- side not the -->.  Ellie  life is an illusion 08:08, April 20, 2019 (UTC)

reups --

09:25, 4/20/2019

Can you smooth the shading on the back and belly?

Reups --

09:37, 4/22/2019

add depth to the eye Willowstep12 (talk) 12:20, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

his eye is meant to be gone, i dont understand what you mean --

13:50, 4/22/2019

What Willowstep means is that since the eye is gone there should be depth to make it look like a hole, not a flat surface. Similar to One-eye's image. - JArtz11  Oblivious to EVERYTHING!  14:58, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

That can be fixed by adding some scar tissue and shading there, that should give it depth  Ellie  life is an illusion 18:12, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

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09:00, 4/23/2019

CBA? 12:48, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 12:59, April 25, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (Q) ~ Approved
ugh i suck at matching tabby patterns

^ colour picked from the apprentice, tried to match that and the kit but none of her images seem to show this side well enough, hope it's okay? :/

Yeah, it's perfectly ok to make up the side that isn't showing. ^^ As long as the overall pattern matches. And could you make the stripes a bit thicker on the bottoms where they end (not the tapered tip)? 03:15, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

not quite sure what you mean, vec? do i taper the tips or make them more blunt? i think the apprentice's stripes are sharp... ?

I guess I'm kinda saying to add some more variety to the stripes thickness. It's very linear right now. Something maybe like this? Thicker on some of the ends, very fine at the tips. I was referencing the apprentice's stripes when doing this. 12:32, April 22, 2019 (UTC)

aah i see what you mean. thanks, i’ll reup in the morning

reups i tried? stripes with a mousepad are a pain > ><  <

CBA? 12:45, April 24, 2019 (UTC)

Approved! 12:59, April 25, 2019 (UTC)