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Lilystar (L) - Tweaked
Ehm, hello? Its me agin, I tweaked Lilystar, blurred hightlinks and darkened shadings..hmm it looks a little like redoned shadings o_O Oh and Darkhallows is OA 18:40,November 28,2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and neck shading a lot, and possibly tone down the eyes. 20:41, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the end of the haunch and white pixels on the tail, paws, and on the left side of the cat. 00:23, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, reuploaded 10:11,November 29,2011 (UTC)

Erase the smudged lineart on the haunch. 02:04 Wed Nov 30

Its not smudged but i made somethig different, i think now it isnt looking like it 07:15,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Nah it still looks a little weird. And it is smudged, even though I know it wasn't you who smudged it. It's "part of the blank" but it's not supposed to be. Erase it and smudge the pelt into the earpink. 03:50 Thu Dec 1

Lighten the paw shading it's darker than the rest. 12:10 Thu Dec 1

Smudged lineart..huuf im blind my friends! :-) Reuploaded 09:26,December 2,2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt color into the earpink more. 23:22, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011

Reuploaded 10:29,December 4,2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine; redone to match her other images. 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the stripes a tad and blur them? 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 00:50, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and blur the shading on the belly. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh darn, I was kinda hoping to do this one. Oh well I've got plenty of images on my to-do list. XD Anyways, great job! Lighten and desaturate the whole image just a bit though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's this big patch of yellow waste near her tail, so erase that. xD 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and there's patches of yellow waste on her head, above our far front leg, and along her back. 02:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, they look brown like the pelt :3 02:58, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes lighter still. 03:31 Wed Nov 30

Re-Uploaded. 23:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the shading just a tad? ^^ 14:58, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make her less green? Maybe it's just my computer, but she looks tinted green. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:04, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed, Paleclaw. The colours are a bit off. 08:09 Sun Dec 4

Brindleclaw (w) - Tweak
OA was Mistystar & the white needed to be smudged, but I couldnt get it to look like the patches so I smudged everything. - 03:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and darken the shading. 03:29 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded.- 03:36, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it a bit more? 03:37 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded - 03:43, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the original artist was Shadowedheart, then redone by Mistystar. Blur the earpink. 18:04, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And redden it a tad as well :P 21:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - 17:42, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it a tad smaller. This is booootiful <3 08:13 Sun Dec 4

Bumblestripe (W) - Tweaked
OA was Night shine, tweaked by Skystar. He needed to be longhaired, and oh my gosh, fail on those tail stripes ._. 01:13, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

No, I mean, look at the stripes I tweaked. Blargh. Anyway, the earpink looks like it sorta pixelated, anyway you can fix that? (I know its not on the list) Hey Shelly.... Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 01:35, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 01:43, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his foreheaad? Like is on his kit? If we went with it this way the stripe would be OVER his eyes, and that would just be WERID...... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the earpink xD 02:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-re-uploaded. FAIL. I missed your comment, sorry Maple xD 21:37, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his head sharper? It looks like he has hair on the top of his head... xD 21:33, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Like this? :3 21:37, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Blizzardpelt, tweaked by Splashpelt, needed to be lightened, comments? 01:41, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a tad. ^-^ 02:25, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just here to say, I actually took it over and got it approved from Blizzardpelt :3 23:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 19:04, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur this < ears ear-pink. and center it, it looks to close to the left sides lineart. 23:22 Sat Dec 3

Rockshade (W) ~Redone


Okay, before y'all lose your minds, Oblivion gave me premission to de ro him, becuase everytime i re-did him, he looked like barf, and if i lightend his color, THAT color would become his lineart color, and it annoyed me, so, i asked to re-do him, and, got this, i know he looks dark-gray, but this is version one of him, and if anyone wants to see version two, just comment, and i'll up load version two. Now then, Comments? (PLEASE ask for version two, i hate this one >.>) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, OA was TottalyTawnypelt, and was then taken over by Frostheart <3, and the highlights and shading was blotchy, and he needed a small, stupmy tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, i went with version number two, 'cause, i hated how the first one looked >.> I like this one, MUCH better....so.....please comment. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:36, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur that shading tons. Thicken it as well. 02:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, a comment! Reuploaded, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:52, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading on the back, make the highlight smaller, and smooth out the shading; it looks really streaky and botchy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:05, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mind lightening the whole image? It's hard to tell which from which. And spread out the shading, along with smoothing it as Scarlet said above me. 23:06, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, give me a few mins, sorry i wans't on yesterday, I had to babysit Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 18:50, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, Reuploaded-I think his highlights look blotchy now that i made them smaller.....but....i'll blur them into oblivion before i upload them again. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:05, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploading -I blurred the shading and highlights, and fixed some blurred lineart, and added depth to the eye out of bordem.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:30, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is still very blotchy. Blur the shading on 100% with a big brush, it usually helps. If you use layers, gaussian blur the heck outta this puppy 22:38, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'd say redo the shading. Use a tutorial if you need help. Make him lighter as well. 23:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Kay, i'll see what i can do. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:15, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I just re-did the image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:28, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 23:51, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:56, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it more. 01:52, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

I can't blur it anymore, it has NO effect. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:17, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If you can't blur it more, I suggest withdrawing this image, then. I'm not saying you couldn't do it, but this shading isn't good enough to be approved. You could try and redo it, but I doubt that it would make a difference. Try Gaussian Blur 10 if you use GIMP. 02:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If you want, I could help you blur the shading. 04:40, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

If Maple isn't going to blur this, you could probably just take over, Moonleaf. 08:21 Sun Dec 4

Purdy (KP) - Redone
OA was Insane. The old colors didn't match and the pattern looked all smudgy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I don't think he would be all scraggly and torn like that when he was a kittypet, he probably got the tears and scars when he was a loner 05:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. His old charart had torn fur, so I'm going to leave that for now. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 22:27, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Regardless, what Ivy said makes sense. I don't think he should have those patches either. 16:22, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know when he got the patches, so I say just keep them. Maybe he got into fights as a kittypet or something. Anyways, it's what makes Purdy...well, Purdy! Keep 'em, Scarlet. 17:31, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste near his right foreleg. 01:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

The non-tabby part of the fur almost looks gray to me, dunno if that's just me or not. Did you color-pick from his elder? 01:15, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. @Ivy, yeah I did.

Blur the earpink and saturate the non-tabby part of the fur so it matches the elder. Also add some mottles to the tabby stripes so it matches the elder. Lookin' good, gurlll 08:22 Sun Dec 4

Hawkfrost (Ki) - Redone
I hate doing kits. Have I ever mentioned how much I absolutely hate them? XD Anyways, needed to be redone to match his other images. OA was Minnowclaw, then tweaked by Icethroat21. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:45, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit. 19:55, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

I took the stripe color directly from the warrior's .xcf file. I took all the colors from there (including shading colors) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:03, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur ---> This ears ear-pink. 23:35 Fri Dec 2

Reuploaded - Done. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:35, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Snaketail (P3) (W) - Tweaked
It really is tweaked. Honest. XD Anyways, shading was extremely blotchy so I just pretty much redid it, I added gray flecks to his chin, and gave him a torn ear. OA was Bramble maybe? Not sure. Comments? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the gray flecks, at first, I thought it was waste. 22:37, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 22:40, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ye know what, he was described with grey flecks on his chin as an elder, and that seems like something that would come from age, so would he really need it on his warrior? And I'll blur the shading once I get another opinion on the grey flecks Sky. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  23:01, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's probably from old age, and since the description was given while he was an elder, it shouldn't be on his warrior image. xD 23:33, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make me wait, geez. xD The torn ear seems a. Bit pointy, can ya fix that? <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 03:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay, removed the gray, blurred the shading, and I redid the ear because I really hated how I did it. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:33, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Wind (Lo) - Redone
BWAHAHAHAHA first image for a while. Color didn't match her leader image, shading/highlights needed to be redone. Blah blah blah. OA was Sandstar12. 20:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Snow, you need to darken your sig so people can read it... Anyway, the eyes on the leader have a ring of orange in them. 22:34, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. <span style="">23:31 Fri Dec 2

Blur the shading. 16:21, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. -- 15:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 16:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflower (W) - Redone
I had permission to re-do her image... the stripes needed to match her queen image, and the OA was Bluestar1776. Comments? 01:52, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Rainy! Define the earpink a little. Make it more like her queen image. Also, blur the stripe that goes underneath her eye. 03:30, December 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'll reupload it in a moment. But, before i do, what do you mean by 'make it more like her queen image'? Can you be more specific? 04:15, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about that. The queen image's earpink was brighter. Just brighten this one a bit. :3 Sorry for the confusion. 17:12, December 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded. Oh. Okay. xD 22:42, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wolfheart (W) ~ Redone
I could not tweak that image. Simple as that. OA was Ashshadow, and the shading needed to be redone, and it looked like there was something wrong with the highlights/whatever they are. 04:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading where the haunch starts. (If you know what I mean). Also, there is a light gray part on the front back leg, can you fix that? 16:20, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Just redid the shading. 16:55, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the haunch highlight a bit bigger and blur it. 17:08, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I do not normally use highlights. There aren't any on this. Hollyleaf was a one-time thing. 17:10, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Fine, if I have to spell it out for you, I mean the area on the haunch where there's no shading. Make that bigger and blur it. 17:13, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

You know what, I've about had it with your cocky attitude. Either be nice about it (and stop assuming things), or don't comment on my images at all. 17:17, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'm just trying to help. Sorry, but I'm not used to people being so particular about what comments they receive. I'm used to someone saying highlights and the other person figuring out what it means. I get that you don't use highlights, and I shouldn't have assumed. 17:19, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm known here for not using highlights. I only used it on Hollyleaf because I wanted to try something new. I like it when people are descriptive and specific on my images, because I see exactly what I need to fix. 17:24, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

All right, I'll remember that next time :) There's a small line of light grey on her back. Add shading there. 17:25, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's from bluring, that much I can tell you. I overblurred on the back. 17:29, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a small line of lighter gray on her back and her haunch: darken it? Blur the earpink a bit, too. Looks good. <span style="">08:24 Sun Dec 4

What God-forsaken gray line are you talking about? It's not there. The changes were probably not showing or something, because I know there's shading there. 15:44, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Cedarstar (L) - Redone
I got permission from Cloudskye to redo this; the shading was I don't even know, he needed to be darker, his belly looked pale grey instead of white, and there was blurred lineart. OA was Darkhallows. 17:00, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. <span style="">23:33 Sat Dec 3

Re-uploaded. 23:38, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste under the hind foot  01:12, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

There is a white pixel by his chin. 02:04, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Waste, you have no friends. Go home. 02:18, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lol Oblivion <3 Lighten the shading a percent or two and blur it. Smudge the earpink into the ear more. Looks good. <span style="">08:26 Sun Dec 4

Violet (KP) - Tweak
Made it lighter. OA was Nightfall101. Comments? 17:43, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make 'er even lighter. <span style="">23:33 Sat Dec 3

Tone down the hightlights a bit. <span style="">23:35, Sat, Dec, 3, 2011

Re-Uploaded - Wait for changes to show - It was on the list to make lighter, so, sorry, but I'm not touching the highlights. 23:38, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading some, though. The colour is perfect, but the shading needs to be darker. <span style="">23:40 Sat Dec 3

Re-Uploaded 23:53, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me or is she starting to look kinda gray? <span style="">08:26 Sun Dec 4

It's not just you, she does look a little gray. :3 Can you define the earpink? 15:59, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lichenfur (E)~ Redone
The shading was off in the old version, and i wanted it to look more like it does im the Manga, so i redid it. OA was Ashshadow and Oblivion got rid of some waste. 20:25, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Could you give her a rumpled pelt? 20:48, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 20:56, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Aww man you beat me to it D: Add some more lighter mottles in her fur. 21:55, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

She should have amber eyes. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 01:11, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Brackenfoot (W) ~ Redone
Well, I tried to make it jsut a tweak, which should have been easier since I had the file from when I redid it last itme, but it just wasn't going to work out with the color change. Oh well, I suppose. He needed to be pale ginger instead of bright ginger. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Moonleaf and a redo by yours truly. 21:24, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Just make his body a little more orange. 22:51, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

But I was told to take the color from Goldenflower or Sandstorm... should I really? 23:04, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

He looks really more brown right now. Make him oranger, or even just a little pinker. Trust me, I know what I'm talking about; try it and find out if it works :3 23:07, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Scorchfur (W) - Tweaked
Neep.. solid cats are boring. :P Anyway, OA was Nightfall101, with a tweak by Splashpelt14 later on. His shading was blotchy, and needed to be redone. Comments? 23:28, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Could you brighten his eye? It looks brown right now. Blur the shading as well. 23:39, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and make it bigger. 01:26, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (R)- Tweaked
She needed a scarred head. I luff Mapleshade. 8D <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 00:21, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scars, and make them more of a fleshy color. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:11, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste above the base of her tail. 01:13, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No idea how the waste got there. Probably left over. <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="Dark blue" >Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 01:19, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Crop the image so there's no space on the outsides. 02:19, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. o.o <font face="Maiandra GD" siz="2" color="maroon" >Sky..... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue"> Just...dust and echoes 02:25, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink the same color as the scars. Awesome! 04:57, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. :3 <span style="">08:28 Sun Dec 4

Whitewing (W) - Tweaked
Woo, original artist was Sandy and the shading needed to be tweaked. 04:56, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Pretty! 05:42, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Spur of the moment decision. Blurred and thanks! 06:00, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a bit. Theese eese bootifulll.... <span style="">08:29 Sun Dec 4

Sol (Alt. Ro) - Tweaked
Just added the tufted ears. <span style="">08:41 Sun Dec 4

Derp. OA of this beautiful, beautiful image was Paleclaw. <span style="">08:43 Sun Dec 4

Oatwhisker (WC) (E) ~ Redone
I just realized I named the file wrong so it didn't reupload. I'll try to fix that. Anyways, OA = Bramble, and it was on the redo list because he needed to be more brownish cream, and the project has a disdain for triangle tabbies. Comments? 16:05, December 4, 2011 (UTC)