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Clawface (W) ~ Tweaked


Orginal artist was Snadstar12. Well, here he is....all I did was add some scars....I tred to make them match is rouge image. Idk if i did or not...but...comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:26, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Please fix the eye? 14:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar near the haunch looks too light at the bottom. 21:55, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

That is because i can't blur that part without blurring the lineart. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Just fix it afterwards or read a tutorial 22:46, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'll move the scar over a bit...then I'll upload. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:51, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Moved the scar over, blurred the shading, and fixed the eye. What else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I've uploaded over to see if i could ger the changes to show. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:55, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-do the shading. 00:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Shading looks fine to me, just needs to be blured a bit. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  04:46, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did the shading and the highlights(Well, I brightened them a tad.) And blurred it to the max. Changes should be in the history. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:49, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make it look like the rogue image? ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 00:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, could you make the ends of the scars a bit pointier? With rounded ends, they kind of look like brush strokes. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  07:54, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, I'll do it late, 'cause, Gimp isn't opening Clawface for some reason, nor is Pixril, so I'll see if I can work on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 13:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Gimp is working now, I'll get right on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:06, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-changes aren't showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy; fix that, and blur the shading more. 22:36, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Omg, the changes ARE showing! What are the odds? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark and blotchy. You'll have to redo it unless you find another way to make it work. ☾Mint☽ Can you go downtown with me? 20:37, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the scar on the tail wouldn't go like that, it can only be where there is flesh. If his rouge is like that, the scar needs to be tweaked. 02:01, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

So the tail isn't flesh?.....it is just fur mussle and bone? I'm confused..... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

You know how the tail bone goes down the mmiddle? There can't be a scar extending across the whole thing because apart from down the middle, the rest is fur. Sky, it's over 9000!! 03:21, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, his rogue charart's tail scar is right next to the middle, so it's a bad choice for a scar location, but it's ok. However, this one is scooted up some. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:24, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are blotchy, blur them. 21:56, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so do I remove the tail scar? Or what? 'Cause, I'm confused.

Sorry, that was me. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:06, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I think you should redo the tail, and put the scar a little lower. 22:13, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading - make it more like his rogue. 14:36, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I know this isn't your problem, but can you define the earpink? It looks really blotchy. 15:16, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, i'll get right on it, sorry, I've been sick, so i haven't been working on this as much as i would like. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I redid his warrior image, hows that? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:02, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Better! Blur the shading and darken it. Darken the scars and blur them as well. 23:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There, Reuploaded, *faceplam* I forgot the scar on his leg. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:41, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I can see the layers of the highlights. Blur them together, please :)  00:26, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudstar (L) - Tweaked
Alright, here's Cloudstar. He needed darker shading, and I changed the earpink beacuse it was purply. Original artist was Sandy. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  15:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. 15:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes aren't showing. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  21:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading needs to be blurred, and the haunch shading is blotchy, so fix that. 22:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  14:18, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There seems to be some lineart or something that's leaked into the <--- ear. It's darker then the rest of the area around it. 23:34, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It was some shading, but I lightened it a tad. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  01:21, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. 14:42, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Suprisingly, the changes are showing ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  15:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 20:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~  00:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The patches shouldnt be smudged. We dont need to tweak the deputy art to match. 01:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Mallownose (A) - Redone
I had too much fun with his Warrior version, I couldn'tresist doing his apprentice too. XD I feel like I'm hogging all the chararts though. o.o *constantly has one up* Anyways, originally by Insane, it had to be made long haired. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:27, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the pupil. 18:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

How do I define a pupil? 0.o It's pure black, and the eye is how it's supposed to be on apprentices. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white part of the eye stand out more, then. It looks like it's part of the eye colour. (Yeah, I don't make much sense sometimes). 01:01, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I wasn't really sure how to fix that, since the white is pure white, and like I said before, it's the shape an apprentice's eye is supposed to be, but I darkened the eye so hopefully that will help. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  04:55, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. blur the shoulder highlight. -- 05:12, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  05:49, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and make the stripes at the top a bit thicker to match his warrior charart. 22:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕   ☆StarClan be with you★  00:47, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the haunch a bit, it stands out too much. 22:26, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  22:59, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Snaketooth (W) - Redone
Yay, new tabby style. Original artist was Mousetalon, and I redid him to be longhaired. 17:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Gorgeous! Darken the stripes ever so slightly and make the earpink more triangular. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  17:29, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

They eyes are too neon. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 17:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:28, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around the tail tip, ear-tip, and bottom chest fur. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 19:04, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did I get them all? 00:59, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

it says he broke his foot, and may not be able to hunt and fight again, maybe twist one of his feet? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not so sure though... 20:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular. 22:46, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't add a broken leg yet. And the earpink is triangular enough I guess... 23:41, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it blends in to the pelt too much. 22:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (L) - Tweaked
Simply tore the ear. The scar was on the image when I opened it on my

computer, so I don't know why it never showed up. Shimmerpool was the original artist, and then I tweaked it. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 17:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste around her head, and above the tail. 18:30, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- changes may not show. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 19:03, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lineart around the tear thicker. 20:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:49, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is really what you were tweaking this for, but do you think you could darken the nose a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  13:55, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:21, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Make the edges of the scar a bit pointier so that it looks more realistic. 23:13, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye. 23:17, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Screech (tb) - Tweaked
The shading needed to be tweaked because it was blotchy and kind of light. Original artist is Blackclaw09. Comments for improvement? 20:29, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing. 20:44, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eyes too. I had to do a double take just to see that they're actually colored. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  21:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's some gray around the entire image. 23:32, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded And I thought the eyes were kind of a...strange choice of color as well. 00:21, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

the shading is still kind of hard to see. Lighten the highlights. Looks nice! 23:11, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded couldn't let it go through 24 hours huh? Lol just kidding. And no there aren't highlights on this 01:30, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Brightspirit (W) - Redone
Decided to redo this one. Original Artist was Sandy. Changes aren't showing up yet. Comments? 22:24, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much more elegant. ^^ The ear-pink could be a bit more triangular, I think. 23:01, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and shading. 23:31, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste by the tail. 03:31, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

And there's more waste below the muzzle, at the back of the head, and near the front legs. 21:06, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the earpink a bit bigger, and blur the shading on the tail. 23:09, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 03:26, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Are those specks on her head? Can you make 'em a little easier to see? 15:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (W) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone as a long haired cat. 23:20, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it a tad. ☾Mint☽ Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:51, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. Blur the paws a bit. 23:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Don't you mean paw? XD Re-uploaded. 23:59, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, I meant waffles. Now darken the shading on the waffles. 00:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe. Waffles. Re-uploaded. 00:50, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading a bit. 00:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 01:02, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the earpink; its a bit too triangular, and who was the original artist? :3 23:08, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry. OA is Brambleclaw14. 01:12, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white paw more. 22:29, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Enjoy. 22:33, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Morningflower (W)~ Redone
I love torties. So much. She needed to be light and orginal artist was Sandstar tweaked by Bramble. Comments? 00:56, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the head. 00:57, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Derp. Ignore that. Make the white look more white. 00:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I love this! Lighten the shading on the chest and the haunch. 20:36, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! Darken/redden the earpink a bit, though. 23:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- 23:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Larkwing (MC) ~ Redone
Original artist was Dawnfeather; redone as a shorthair. Comments? 22:45, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Do you think you could add a stripes in the area that's above her belly and in between her front arm and hanch? Also, there's a few miscolored pixils below her whiskers that are colored green. 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the haunch. 22:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks, Ivystripe, but I couldn't add another stripe without ruining the shading, so I just made the other stripe longer. 23:06, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be more silver. Just seems like dark gray tabby right now. 23:40, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add a couple more stripes as well. 00:24, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Add shading to the herbs. 01:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes towards the base. It looks odd being blurred at the tips, but not quite as blurry at the base of the lineart. 20:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:08, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (L) - Tweaked
Hai. I liek waffles. I love this one. I tore his ear, added a pale underbelly, re-did the stripes, darkened the shading, and all that stuff <3 I tried to make him look as cool as Tigerstar, but StarClan told me that isn't his destiny. ;-; OA was Nightshine. Comments? 12:05, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Did this really require to be redone? You could have just added those things easily. Now all of his images will have to be redone. The earpink is hard to see against his pelt. He needs more stripes on his head. 15:42, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, don't complain. There's no need to get all snippy. I think it looks much better then Nightshine's version. *waits to die for insulting Nightshine* Plus, it shouldn't be that much work to tweak the others. It looks amazing, however, lighten the shading on the tail. 15:51, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Who said I was snippy? I just thought that's what Iceheart said. 15:54, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

But, you do have to admit, it looks much better then it used to. I mean, no offense to Nightshine and all, but the image needed redone. 15:56, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

It does look better honestly. Though, like Ivy said, it didn't NEED to be redone, it does look better now, so I say keep it as it is now. Anyways, blur the stripes a bit more, and make the earpink stand out more against the pelt. Maybe look at Squirrelflight's image to get a good example for earpinks on bright ginger cats? Also, the stripe on the head is really thick, could you maybe make it thinner, or split it inot a couple small stripes instead of one big one? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:11, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I noticed it said he has a thick pelt, so should he be long haired, or not? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  16:14, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think so - I think it just meant he has a thick undercoat. 20:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I read in his original archive and it said that Graystripe was jealous of his fur because it dried much faster than his own long pelt. 20:05, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hasn't it been constantly repeated that his pelt is the color of fire? This seems a bit dark for that. 20:14, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I fixed the shading (it was bothering me), split the stripes on the head, and I'm not going to change the ear pink. It was the same color as it was before. 20:17, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you curve the scar a bit more? 20:38, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

It looks really odd that way... 20:39, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The scar's fine, in my opinion :3 But could you smudge the stripes on the tail a bit? This looks beautiful, Icestorm. 20:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I think you meant blur. xD -- 20:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I did, as clarified on Skype x3 Sorry cx 20:59, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look too thick at the ends, make them pointier, and also, give him the M-tabby markings on t he head. 21:59, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

He needs to be longhaired, it says he has a thickpelt. Durf, nvm. This looks relly good. Lighten the highlifhts a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:46, September 13, 2011 (UTC)  Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 22:43, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Read above, Maplepool. He doesn't need to be longhaired. 22:45, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, but wasn't he mentioned with thick fur multiple times? It probably won't always mean the coat, and just because Graystripe has longer fur doesn't mean he can't be longhaired... 22:48, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Timberfur (W) ~ Redone
I seriously got tired of seeing the blank in my pictures and not getting around to do this. I rushed this, but it had to be done. Original artist was Mousetalon, and I redid as a longhair. 20:51, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty. Darken the shading and blur. 20:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ._. I think I killed it xD 20:58, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs o be more even; and define the earpink. Also confirm the light source, and make sure the highlights are equally light. 22:00, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The highlights have to be equally light, I used white for them. 22:30, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights seem a bit confusing. Does the light come from the back, or the side? Make the shading more consistent. 00:35, September 14, 2011 (UTC)