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Frost (StarClan) - Withdrawn
Did I do a good job? Tigerbird-The-Great 16:59, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

He needs to be short-furred, needs a texture, and the image isn't the right size. For the texture, I recommend asking David, the artist of Frost's rogue image, how he made his.

On Frost's page, It says he's thick furred. Tigerbird-The-Great 17:11, August 9, 2014 (UTC)

Thick fur does not mean long-haired. I have thicker hair, but it wasn't always as long as it is. I used to have it fairly shorter when I was younger, and it was pretty dang thick. The thickness refers to the density of the fur, not the length. Plus, you have an an image to match, and David uses the short-furred blank.

Define and darken the shading a tick, and blur the earpink. Very nice job on this. If it helps, for thick furred cats, to make the shading look less flat, I do two layers of dark blue shading, instead of black. 5:43 PM, Sat Aug 9, 2014

Did you shrink the lineart at all? It looks much smaller than it should and I don't think it's just displaying as a thumbnail Brick   09:58, August 10, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve this before posting it. If you're not gonna reserve it, I'll just decline it again. =P I told you this when you posted it before, and in chat, Tiger.

^ I also told Tiger in one of her lessons. Also, there's waste around the tail, and random black around the earpink. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  21:53, August 10, 2014 (UTC'''

Re-ups here: http://tinypic.com/r/21a9v1u/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 03:00, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink and maybe dull it a tad as it looks a bit neon right now. Also blur the texture a bit. And the tail suggest the lightsource for the shading is coming from the lower left, but the body suggests it's coming from upper right? Brick  07:51, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste around the head and the base of the tail. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  11:08, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups here: http://tinypic.com/r/14uci00/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 14:54, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

You still need to blur the earpink more. I also see waste outside of the tail, a black spot near his ear, and the image needs to be resized. He's also looking a bit cross eyed... so perhaps look at other StarClan images to see where the eyes are focused. I'd define the eye depth a little more, too. 4:21 PM, Mon Aug 11, 2014

Re-up here: http://tinypic.com/r/29wmxr6/8 Also thanks for the tips! Tigerbird-The-Great 17:01, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred. 17:37 Mon Aug 11

Unblurred lineart here: http://tinypic.com/r/sgpidg/8 Tigerbird-The-Great 17:45, August 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail, face, and leg shading, (read: add another layer of slightly less blurred shading, it makes it a appear darker while still being on the same opacity as the original layer, give or take), and perhaps the belly shading a little more too. Nice job on the eyes. 6:05 PM, Mon Aug 11, 2014

The color seems top be overlapping onto the lineart. Is your lineart layer the top one? 19:52 Mon Aug 11

You need to upload over File:Frost.star.png and post that image here. Just uploading it to tinypic doesn't show the changes here.

I fixed the charart alignment for you. Darken his texture a tad. His texture is a bit darker on his rogue image. Also, Define and add depth to his overall shading, and smudge/blur the earpink. And a little depth to his eyes wouldnt hurt either. Good charart for a beginner :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 17:23, August 12, 2014 (UTC)

Changing heading to For Approval and promoting you, since you know what to do and understand the basics of making chararts. You also need to use the file I linked for reuploading. That is, again, File:Frost.star.png. Using anything else won't work with the template. I can rename it for you.

Uh, the image you just placed on this page belongs to Breezeheart. Did you make a mistake and upload the wrong file or something? That art isn't yours.

I fixed the alignment for you, again. Thank you for changing it. Define the overall shading. Also, what Snow meant, is to reupload over my old image, not post my image instead of your own. When you go to the link she gave you, there is a button that says "Reupload with new file". Reupload this image to it, and that should be the place you keep reuploading, not posting new images everytime.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 22:06, August 13, 2014 (UTC)

Please remember when uploading to make sure the image has the file name ONLY, and nothing like left, right, center, or thumb next to it, to avoid mucking up the page formatting. 10:28 PM, Wed Aug 13, 2014

hey guys, please remember that wikia sometimes automatically aligns the image, it's no big deal if someone has to fix it. thanks. 19:16, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

The texture doesn't flow with the fur on the head. 19:20 Thu Aug 14

I think the texture is a bit too thick, thin it out and have a bit more of it, and make sure it flows with the direction of the fur, not just going straight across the body. Have it follow the curve of the cheek, the nose, the forehead, the slope of the back, and so on. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:04, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

The texture seems a little dark, and the shading is blotchy. 8:09 PM, Thu Aug 14, 2014

There's waste everywhere. Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  20:52, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Duck, it only auto-aligns if you're not using source mode. It never aligns for me and I only use source. Visual is sometimes a pain in the rear and that's what auto-aligns it. Visual mode is nasty as heck and I hate it lmao source mode is the best thing ever. While I'm commenting, it appears that there are random patches of shading that have vanished or look like they've been erased.. also darken the ear pink a bit as it doesn't quite match the shade used on the rogue.

FYI: The color used for the earpink and nose is #9a6d6d in hex color mode. You can download a picture of it to coloprick from here 10:08 PM, Thu Aug 14, 2014

Thanks! I'll Re upload soon! Tigerbird-The-Great 23:29, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

Try using a 1x brush, and make little strokes throughout the image following the natural way the fur grows, and smudge it with a 1x brush, then play with the opacity until its not as dark.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:41, August 14, 2014 (UTC)

There are bits of missing shading on his paws and tail 09:35, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source 05:45, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Tigerbird-The-Great 03:34, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink and texture a bit more. ~ Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  05:14, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I have smudged the texture and the ears. Tigerbird-The-Great 13:56, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the texture a bit more, and there's waste around the lineart. ~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  16:49, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the texture at all on the white, the belly shading looks very hard edged, and the facial shading could be a bit more defined as well as on the feets. <span style="">7:00 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

Blur the earpink on a guassian blur of 1 and smooth out the shading. <span style="">6:02 PM, Tue Aug 19, 2014

Smudge the texture. Also, blurring the ear pink like that isn't required. You could smudge it instead and get the same results.

Curve the shading on the belly. Also, remember to say when you re-upload an image. <span style="">3:08 PM, Fri Aug 22, 2014

Define the overall shading, smudge the texture, and give the eyes some depth.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:50, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on?

Re-uploaded. :) Tigerbird-The-Great 00:00, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

The texture gets lost in the shading, and the earpink looks a little hard edged. Nice job on the eyes! <span style="">2:04 PM, Mon Aug 25, 2014

I want to withdraw this please. Tigerbird-The-Great 01:33, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

You forgot to change the heading. =)--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  06:45, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Shattered Ice (Warrior) ~ For Approval
Heyyy :D Missed you all so much <3 Alrighty, so it's my first image back so don't go too rough on me..if you hate the tinted shading let me know. But black shading didn't make it look good at all. The pattern is a real pattern, but if you hate that let me know. Not bad for my first one in a while. :) Comment away!  18:33, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

The gray and white dosen't quite match the rogue image, and he needs to be long haired. 18:35, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Whoops sorry, my bad. Didn't know there was a rogue image. I'll redo it. 18:38, August 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It actually went pretty smoothly on the body. The tail was my troublemaker..I know it doesn't look too good, but I tried..any suggestions on the tail pattern? x.x Lemme know if there's any shading probs. 16:13, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

There shouldn't be any gray near the front legs (looking at the rogue a bit more anyways), and expand the white chest area a little bit too.

Tbh, I think those areas are fine. Because if you look at the rogue's front leg closely, the gray is going down the leg a bit, like over the muscle. And the gray went over the chest exactly as this is, because the rogue is almost exactly like the warrior blank, only difference is the rogue sat down and raised his head up. That's how I looked at it and based my design. But of course, if someone else agrees with you, I'll change it. :3 Just stating my opinion. 16:39, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Skye - there shouldn't be as much gray, since there's some spots with gray that the rogue doesn't have. 16:44, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Uh, not on the front legs? Forelegs are front, not back. There is no gray on that chest area leading down to the legs, while you have some here. The white chest is also fairly larger on the rogue, while with this, I can't even tell he has one. There shouldn't be any gray there at all, since the rogue and warrior are facing the same direction. The gray area should be the belly area, not the chest, which on the rogue and warrior blanks, are two different things. The belly is the area between the legs on this blank, while on the rogue, there's more room, and you can tell where the belly is. With these blanks, that area is quite a bit smaller. As you have it, it does not quite match, and since they're facing the same direction, the placement should match as well. If it was the opposite side, you'd have more room to "play", so to say, but with this, you don't.

Gosh no need to be rude. I was just stating an opinion and asking for a gentle comment. I'll fix it later. .-. 16:59, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

I wasn't being rude. I was explaining my critique in further detail. I fail to see exactly how I was being rude, when all I was doing was elaborating on my apparent rejected comment. When you post art, this should be expected. I was providing you with a legitimate comment, and telling you to move something, remove something, expand something, ect, isn't rude. Rude would be lying to you and telling you this doesn't match at all- which it does pretty much match, actually, except for that patch of gray, which I asked you to fix....and also define the light on both front legs too, please. ^^

Define your tail light. And Snow is right; they wasn't being rude, but purely honest. 17:38, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry...It's just I've been through a lot of crap recently and cats have just been being mean to me so when you use italics and bolds it just comes off the wrong way at first. I read it over a few times just now and realized you didn't mean it to be in a rude way. So I'm sorry for overreacting. -Back to the image, I removed the gray from the white underbelly and from above the foreleg. Added a few highlights on the legs and tail to help show where that light is at..sorry again Cloudy. 22:06, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Looking good (he looks very fluffy :3)! Can you just darken the shading, especially on the tail?

Reuploaded. Haha, thank you Stoney! :3 22:36, August 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading going down the spine and on the back leg. Brick 18:44, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't blur it too much for I think I'd be told to define it again. 19:37, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hey I don't mean to rush but I have to get this approved by Friday because I'm going to AZ for 9 days. No computer is accessible. So please comment so we can get this approved fast?? Thank you!! :) 19:13, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

The white on the back legs look really gray, and I believe there would be at least a little bit of light on them. Also define the shading on the gray. Please don't ask for comments after only a day. If it's been like three, that's one thing. One is rushing it and makes you appear really impatient.

Re-uploaded. I'm sorry, I've been told that more than once. But I do really need this approved by Friday..or I don't know what I'll do. 22:36, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

I realize this, but that doesn't mean we can twist things because of others going on vacation. People are busy and have lives. Also, shift the placement of the white a bit on the face. The white on the rogue goes a bit farther up, and is a bit thinner on the muzzle. This kinda shows exactly where I'm talking about. There's also flecks of faded lineart throughout the image, especially on the tail.

Re-uploaded. Is that better? And in case uploads are not working again... 17:36, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

CBA?

Sorry to interrupt, but could you define the shading just a little bit? 12:25, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''It's alright, Beebs. May someone now redo the CBA? Also thanks Cloudy for doing that. You da best. <3 12:36, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading on the backleg and tail? This is really good. =)<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:48, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! But I'd prefer not to define it more because I'd be told to define the light again. It's hard with a cat like this because that leg is white, so it'd have to be a gray shading like that or else the leg would look dark gray. And the tail shading is already pretty dark so I would rather not define it more but if someone else agrees I'll do it. Sorry if it looks like I'm shooting down your comment. I'm not. ;) 15:24, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

You can use black/darker shading. Why do people think you can't use black on white cats??? Anyways, I agree with Breezeheart. I can't see the shading at all on that back leg.

Re-uploaded. I always use black shading on white. :/ sorry I thought you were talking about the back leg closest to us. I added more shading to the farthest back leg. Also my dad brought his laptop so I was able to edit it ^.^ And [http://www.ezimba.com/work/140827C/ezimba14858134621400.png in case changes are not showing.. ] 17:50, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Littlebird (Star) - For Approval
probably my first tabby I ever did that I actually liked. colors are pulled off of the original file. comments? 19:24, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna take a guess that you smudged the shading? If you did, thin the smudges out a little bit, and if you didn't, blur the shading/smooth it out. Also her elder looks kinda shiny so I suggest maybe fixing that sooner or later since that shading makes this look different in terms of color.

Add depth to the shading. This is gorgeous. <span style="">20:27 Sun Aug 17

Oh myyyyy, this is beautiful! Define the face shading a tad? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  22:17, August 17, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded thanks dudes! 02:38, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Ducky! :D Define the earpink a little more..it seems to disappear with the fur colors. Also blur the smudged shading some more. 17:46, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded 18:04, August 23, 2014 (UTC)

I think the smudges on the shading are a little too thick.

Re-uploaded' 02:49, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lizardstripe (Star) ~ CBA
Used the colors and stripe pattern from her other chararts. Comments? :3

Oooohhh pretty! Smudge the earpink a little bit? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  16:47, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Thanks! ^^ I smudged the earpinks. It doesn't show much difference, though. Click for changes.

Her muzzle and upper/bottom of her neck looks a bit gray omg those eyes made an mean cat look so cute :o 21:11, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the texture a bit, and can you make the stripe less smooth? Her other images are a little...bumpier, so to say. Blur them a teeny bit too.

smudge the white a tad more. 10:31, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Smudged the white fur a bit and lightened the shading on it, defined the texture and tried with the stripes by sharpening it a tad and then blurring it a little.

CBA? She's very lovely. .o.

Duskfur (Queen) ~ For Approval
Since Snow withdrew this, i gave it a shot since she needed a Queen image. I tried to match the stripes the best i could. Colorpicked from her Warrior image, i used a redish tint for the shading. Also, that stripe on the tail is part of the dorsal stripe. Comments?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  00:58, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

Her dorsal stripe should be sorta more to the left on her tail, and same with the back because of the perspective. Brick 10:20, August 19, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the pale part on her tail, and I'm also agreeing with Brick. ^^

'''Re-uploaded. '''I just decided to redo the stripes. Moved dorsal stripe to the left, and made pale parts look more visible. Is that better?<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  02:04, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

I still can't see the pale part of the tail, what color did you use? <span style="">7:05 PM, Wed Aug 20, 2014

I color picked it from her warrior image. Its the shading making it not visible; if i make it even more defined, you wont be able to see the shading. =/--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  19:30, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe swith around the light source? I'm assuming you're using a lightsource coming from the top right, so mayve try bottom left so -> of her head would be in shadow? <span style="">7:33 PM, Wed Aug 20, 2014

I think switching the source would be a good idea for this image. Give it a shot and see what happens.

Re-uploaded. Switched the light source; Ive never used this angle as the light source before, so i tried to make it look the best i could. Is that better? =)--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  05:53, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Hm would you smudge the underbelly fur into the rest of the fur just a little, not too much, but just so it'd blend and look a little more natural? Very pretty! :) 11:51, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

I'd rather not, since on her other image, it looks like the OA blurred it instead of smudging, but i will if someone else agrees.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  04:35, August 22, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge it. It'll look a bit more furry that way. <span style="">4:58 PM, Sat Aug 23, 2014

Re-uploaded. Smudged pale parts, and also lightened the fur a bit to match her other images. Better?--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  03:31, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Add some shading on the belly? It looks kinda flat.. 13:39, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

There is no shading on the belly. I was told to switch the lightsource so the pale parts were more visible. So I would rather not, unless someone else agrees.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  20:29, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe add a small curve so the light looks like it's coming from behind? To me, it looks fine, this is only a suggestion. <span style="">9:34 PM, Sun Aug 24, 2014

Re-uploaded. Added small curve of shading. Better?--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  00:26, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and give it more shape. Nutmeg (the one below this section) appears to have the same basic source (if I'm seeing Jayie's shading correctly), so perhaps you could try that? This appears to be one giant dark line along her back.

Re-uploaded. I just decided to redo the stripes and shading. I tried my best to make the stripes resemble her Warrior image more by moving them closer together, and i moved her dorsal stripe so that it was more in the center of her back/tail. I used a red tint this time; so you should be able to see through it now. Is that better? =/--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:51, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Nutmeg (KP) (Q) - For Approval
My sole motivation to make Nutmeg's queen image was because I wanted to draw a collar. That was my sole intention here. Oh, and here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140821C/ezimba13931812684100.png Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:12, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the base color a shade or two and brighten her up a bit, looks very dark compared to the original. Blur the shading and sharpen the white as it is starting to look gray. Looks nice!! :) also I'm not sure but should there be more stripes on the new one? It seems like the old one has a lot. Plus they entwine in places while on yours they kind of just go straight. Lol sorry for being an ass with the long comment :3 12:00, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

I pulled the base color directly from the image, so I don't want to lighten it, it would make it inaccurate. Same with the belly fur - it was that grayish color on the other image. I'll blur the shading and add more stripes when I get home. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 13:06, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

The base color is fine, Jayie. Different shading techniques will have different results, and might alter the color a bit.

This charart is now bugging the heck out of me. I've revised it a good 20 times now. I can't seem to get that color as bright and saturated as the other image. I think it's the shading. :/ I've tried reducing it, but it's only helped somewhat. Suggestions? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:27, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Possibly blur the shading on the front legs a tad? They look very hard edged.<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  10:17, August 22, 2014 (UTC)

Blurred. Jayie Unwritten words~ 14:16, August 22, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe sharpen the edges of the stripes? This is very pretty! Mapleflight (talk) 16:55, August 22, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the shading a bit? I can barely see it. <span style="">10:27 PM, Fri Aug 22, 2014

Urgh, I am so fed up with this charart. I made some changes, but I'm still not satisfied with it. Any suggestions how to make it fit the kittypet image better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:41, August 23, 2014 (UTC)

I think it matches fine. It's beautiful! Blur the tail shading a bit, and perhaps define it slightly? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  13:44, August 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:04, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Shiningheart (Q) ~ For Approval
I tried. This is hideous. Changes. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  23:26, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Sne's purtty... add depth to the belly and face shading a bit? <span style="">11:32 PM, Wed Aug 20, 2014

Re-ups Thank you! <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  23:37, August 20, 2014 (UTC)

Nice work! Try and sharpen the edges of the stripes 04:33, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped As with Dawncloud, any more and I'll get random pixels. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz |undefined  and  Melody  10:02, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her face and back paw that's on the ground. - she's beautiful. 13:54, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the stripes. <span style="">15:40 Mon Aug 25

How do I smooth them out? I tried blurring them, but then they'd need sharpening again, and then it looks nearly exactly the same. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:47, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped, btw. TY, Sorrel! <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:50, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Try going over them with the paintbrush tool. <span style="">16:41 Mon Aug 25

Re-ups <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  18:20, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

The highlight on the body and tail seem duller than the face and forearm which looks rather off. Add to the highlight on the tail and body to make it lighter and match the face and forearm for consistency with the shadows. 01:56, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Harespring (D) ~ For Approval
Tried to match the warrior as best I could. Pulled all colors from that pic as well. <span style="">12:00 AM, Tue Aug 26, 2014

The color for the brown is #5c2e03. The brown you have is slightly darker.

#reupped <span style="">12:22 AM, Tue Aug 26, 2014

Define the tail shading? This is actually really good, Rocket. =)--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  06:47, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

reupz Thanks Breezeheart! <span style="">4:14 PM, Tue Aug 26, 2014

Smudge the patches a little more like the warrior.

Coriander (Lo) ~ For Approval
Beep beep. 00:01, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm soooo soooorrrrrryyyy ;_________; But Scarlet has this reserved and you don't. <span style="">0:06 Tue Aug 26

my internet wasn't working, sorry. i'll go reserve her now i thought i got her.... 00:14, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

wait, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/Warriors_Wiki:Charart?diff=911446&oldid=911445 <-- I did get her. idk what happened there.... 00:15, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Edit conflict is here, which is a few edits before Scar's, which makes the image yours, Beebs.

Perhaps define the light on the tail? Wow, i love the pattern =)--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  06:49, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

re-up thank yoou 8D 11:53, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

I can't tell what color her eyes are, but she's been described with amber eyes in the book.

They're amber. <span style="">16:31 Tue Aug 26

As I said before in chat, whiten the white...and perhaps blur the smudges on the belly/other white areas just a liiiiittle bit, so they look a teeny bit softer.

re-up 00:06, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Give a little more shape to the body with shading. Stunning. 01:50, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

re-up 03:34, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define/darken/make more visible/whatever you call it the shading on the main part of the body, aka the tortie part, not the white part. It looks a little flatter compared to the white areas. Could you also lighten the white just on the belly a teeny bit too?

Havenpaw (A) ~ For Approval
I adore her name <3 comments? I'll probably add shading to her muzzle on the next upload 00:15, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

The white looks really gray on the neck.. Mind lightening it up a bit? otherwise, this is great =)<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  06:51, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes thank you dear 15:51, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you whiten the white a little bit more? Like, the shading itself is fine, so perhaps add some highlights or something along those lines. I was going to go for this same pattern omg

Stoatfur (BS) (W) - For Approval
So happy to get to design my first tortoiseshell. I think the shading's a little too dark, but I'm insanely happy with the markings. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:15, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Um... Stoatfur's listed as a ginger. <span style="">12:17 AM, Tue Aug 26, 2014

In Bramblestar's Storm, she's listed as a tortoiseshell female. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:17, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Idk if it's a must, but can you expand the eye color throughout the whole eye? idk you can ignore this if you want to though. Wow this is amazing *o* <span style="">0:19 Tue Aug 26

Reuploaded. And thanks. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:30, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Ahh, by whole eye I mean this. <span style="">0:34 Tue Aug 26

I... did? O.o Wait, do you mean erase some of the lineart? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:37, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Yes. She looks a bit pupil-less like that... other than that beautiful job, as always! <span style="">12:38 AM, Tue Aug 26, 2014

Aren't you just supposed to leave the lineart alone though? If not, I'll change it, that'll give me more room to give depth to the eyes. And aw, thanks. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:40, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Nah, you can add more eye pixels. Everyone else does it, and that's the only lineart editing that is permitted.

Sweet. :) Reuploaded. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 00:53, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on this beautiful creature. 15:52, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 21:58, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

I can see the shading, but it kind of disappears in the pattern (which is beautiful btw). Define the shading a bit more or maybe use a slightly darker tint. 01:48, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

It was already pretty defined, so I darkened it a touch, which I think helped. And thanks. :D Jayie  Unwritten words~ 03:24, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (W) ~ For Approval
He is supposed to be ginger, right? idk you guys can tell me but here he is. <span style="">0:16 Tue Aug 26

Black tom. <span style="">12:20 AM, Tue Aug 26, 2014

However, he is listed as a warrior with this description, so it's safe to assume that it's his new one. 00:23, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'm keeping him ginger unless there's a cite for him being a black tom as a warrior. <span style="">0:29 Tue Aug 26

There's no cite for it that I am aware of. He'll stay ginger unless otherwise specified.

windclan cat, he needs to be shorthaired 01:09, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, this is his main image. His alt would be black, since that description is from Kate, and was given to us before BS came out. He would need kit and app images in this as well, since without Kate's description, he wouldn't have had one until this came out. Too many description controversies omg

Give the cheek and shoulder a bit more defined shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:36, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ugghh I hate shorthairs ew <span style="">20:24 Tue Aug 26

Blur and/or smudge the shading only on the feet. Also, can you define where exactly the ear pink is? I think I can see it, but I'm not sure if that's ear pink or pelt color.

Rowanstar (L) - For Approval
I have wanted this since the very first day I started reading Warriors. VIVA LA ROWANSTAR!

Haha very pretty!! Define the earpink in --> this ear. I can't see it very well as it kind of blends into the fur. Amazing as always~ ^·^ 18:03, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

I color-picked, so they're all the same. I'd love to change the color, but I don't want to without the agreement of others. So, is anyone else going to find an issue if I slightly tweak this ear pink color so it's visible?

I won't <span style="">9:13 PM, Tue Aug 26, 2014

Re-uploaded.

I'm a bit confused on the direction of light, mainly just with the chest and leg shading. The back, hindleg, face, and tail all distinctly show that it's coming from the right side of the image, yet the chest and leg shading make it appear as though it's coming from the left side. Perhaps close of the highlight on the left side and simply move the leg shading over to the other side. 01:46, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope I did this right lol.

Kinkfur (E) - For Approval
02:27, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Foxleap (Star) ~ For Approval
poor Foxleap :c. Colorpicked from his apprentice, warrior, and kit images. Since all of his other images was on his right side, i had a bit of creative freedom with the stripes, but i matched his shoulder stripe. I know this probably doesnt match 100%, but this was really fun to do =) He also has a light coat of texture under his stripes, and overtop. I used black shading for this; but i really don't like it that much.. I might redo the shading on the next upload with tinted shading instead. Anyways, Comments? =)<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  06:04, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

If his other images don't have texture, this doesn't get it either. It looks like he doesn't have it to my knowledge, so please remove it. This also needs to be named File:Foxleap.star.png, which I'm going to go ahead and rename this for you. The capitalization can and does make a difference.

Looking at his other images, it did look like they had texture... But I'll go ahead and remove it on the next upload. =\ And sorry about the file name; made a mistake. Thanks for changing it.--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  23:31, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

The lighter red parts (e.g. his chest and tail) seem like they could probably be a bit lighter as this looks really dark comparably. 01:41, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

His images don't have texture. His stripes are smudged and his shading is smudged but he has no additional texture. And lighten him up in general really. <span style="">3:17 Wed Aug 27 2014

Re-uploaded. Removed texture, redid the stripes, lightened up pale parts and base fur a bit, and smudged the shading. Better? Also, does the new stripes match a bit better than the old one? I'm kind of torn between which i thought matched more.. Thoughts?--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  05:32, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Humor me for a second, and upload an alternate version of this on like iaza or whatever it's called with the base at about #9C3F1A, and show me what it looks like? This still appears a bit too dark, and the comparing the history doesn't seem like it was lightened very much at all.

Heres the version with that color code: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=23ixef5&s=8#.U_1wMMVdVKY Should i reupload this version over the current?--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  05:45, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, please. That color worked out a lot better than I initially thought. .o.

Re-uploaded. When i initially made the base that color, i had to lower the opacity a bit, since it made it look really ginger.. But im glad that color works out better =)--<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~    Gaara Forever ♥☻  05:53, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Crowfrost (D) - For Approval
#Crowfrostforleader2015 Brick  07:36, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

this has to match his warrior image. 09:46, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

It looks like the white parts are blurred on his Warrior image.. it looks like you smudged it here; so to make it match, maybe blur them instead? Also, the white on the tail looks really gray.<span style="color: blue;font-family: Monotype Corsiva; background: black; border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: Blue;"> ~ Breezey ~  Gaara Forever ♥☻  09:55, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/15e9tuf.png, oops! I didn't know he had a Warrior Image. When I made the image, there was no warrior image on his page, so I thought he didn't have one. My mistake -w-' Brick   14:57, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

I'd think some of the white on his one paw (back front paw lol) would show up on this blank.

Define the light on his legs 15:54, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on his tail too. You might also want to think about lightening the shading on the white part of the tail by just using the eraser tool with a lower opacity. 01:37, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Hazeltail (Star) ~ For Approval
Why did she have to die?:'(

I used blue tint for the shading SziriXxX (talk) 13:44, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

The patch of white at teh base of her tail looks gray with the shading, maybe can you move it slightly? And also, The shading appears to peel away at certain parts, her cheek, above her tail tip, front paws. Brick 14:40, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the white/gray area on the ear.

re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 15:51, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit - purty! 15:52, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Pretty! You need to edit the tail to match the others. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:59, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Very nice! Define/sharpen the earpink a little more in this ---> ear and smudge the earpink into the fur in <--- this ear over here. Keep it up! 18:09, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

re-ups Tried to match the tail..well..i'm not too happy with it :p SziriXxX (talk) 19:23, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Thicken the tail lineart some. <span style="">20:29 Tue Aug 26

re-ups --SziriXxX (talk) 21:21, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  23:14, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

I can't find a cite for Hazeltail being in StarClan. It's not mentioned in Bramblestar's Storm, nor on Vicky's Facebook page. Unless someone finds a cite, then this'll need to be declined.

Amberpaw (A) ~ For Approval
I loved her character the minute I read about her in the preview. Here she is. Her description in BrS's allegiances is going to be main, while the one from TLH will be an alt (Thank you Skye for clearing that up for me.) Plus I used the shading guide for the shading cause I can't ever get the shading right. 15:06, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on everywhere but the main body and tail, and perhaps darken the tail stripes. I kinda can't see them. She's looking pretty, though. ^.^

Stormcloud (KP) ~ For Approval
Is it possible for me to get the whole set later? I already have the others finished, I just need this approved. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  15:52, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his hip a bit, and define the earpink, it's hard to see. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:07, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

For the hundrenth time, my shading is always smudged . AKA no, I won't blur it. Re-upped for earpink tho. <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  23:02, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you smudge the shading some more? <span style="">23:31 Tue Aug 26 23:31, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Tbh, I can't tell it's smudged, and I would have made the same mistake Jayie did. Don't get snippy- it's honestly hard to see that it's smudged shading. Also, what's up with the tail stripes? I can't tell they're there because of the shading.

..Did I come across as rude? I'm sorry, that wasn't my intention V_V Anyway, the tail stripes are rings. Should I make them more visible? <font color="#1B6D96">~ <span style="color:Blue;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:Red;border:4px ridge; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color: #000000;">Shinx Blitz  and  Melody  00:03, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Could you please, Shinx? That would be lovely. ^.^

Lighten the ear pink a bit, or at least make it more visible. Also, he kind of looks blind with the eyes so dull like that...perhaps lighten them up or sumtin'.... 01:34, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Hollypaw (BS) (A) ~ For Approval
I love this pattern. Comments? 20:20, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

She's only black. I don't know who added black and white, but they're mistaken. She's supposed to be a spitting image of Hollyleaf.

Reuploaded. No problem; it's easy enough to fix. Since she's said to look like Hollyleaf, I changed her eyes and earpink to match her images (I meant to give her green eyes anyways). 21:05, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

can you lighten her a tiny bit? i cant realy tell the shading and pelt apart 01:30, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

O'Hara (KP) ~ For Approval
ye 05:13, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define and darken collar shading plz. I can't believe you used that color for a collar, you loser.