Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Broken Shadow (Q) - Redone
Took colors from her sharpclaw, but the pattern is screaming triangle tabby to me. I'd love to redo them both for pattern. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 02:18, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the belly "highlight" round-er... :3 02:30, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah...both of them are total triangle tabbies....anyway, define the shoulder highlight a smidge. 03:14, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Define the "highlights" on the legs. 23:47, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some. 18:08, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 00:30, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly blur the shading a tad. (Mostly the belly and haunch) 19:43, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe widen the belly "highlight" a smidge. 07:40, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarpelt (W) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike and his tail needed to be fluffier. That's all I'm doing :)  05:41, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken the lineart a tad? It looks too spiky. 21:19, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken it where? Please be specific  02:54, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Looks like it could be thickened at the lowest part by his rump. :3 12:20, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

-pokes- Still working on this Ivy? 03:03, 27, 05, 2012

Not sure how to explain, but above the third... spike from the bottom of the tail it looks like a straight line, maybe make it come out some. I hope that makes sense xD. 19:48, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry didn't get that last comment in time  23:19, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Q) - Tweaked
Tweaked to be darker and I only ran the burn tool through it, so I'm not fixing anything else. Changes can be found here if they aren't. 20:57, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make it darker, and I think (not sure though) that while using the burn tool (as I know for me it happens at times) the shading went a bit blotchy, so blur it a bit. :/ 09:15, 23, 05, 2012

Re-Ups^ 20:19, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. 20:13, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ChanCharm 03:51, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ I think the earpink is fine, and blurred to the max. 20:18, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading. 22:18, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (A) ~ Tweaked
Meh xD Need stripes. Comments? 21:21, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot her facial stripes~ Skt Like a baws  22:28, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I believe you're right o3o  20:15, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the closest paw a little. Breeze whisker  05:29, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail stripes a bit. 09:10, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for the wait, I did this a while ago but I forgot to reupload :P  17:02, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and (from our point of view) the right part of the haunch shading. ChanCharm 03:54, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

It said to only add stripes, so that's all I'm doing. 11:45, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

If it has to be done, why not do it? This is up for approval now, so do everything that needs to be done so it doesn't have to be nominated again. 17:41, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, how does it look? 03:32, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (W) ~ Redone
think i'm actually proud of this considering its my first time trying these kinds of stripes :3 I wen't into this just going to change the shading but it was decided she would be redone, Hope she looks good! 20:25, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

I love it! Blur the shading. Also, this should be uploaded over File:Dawnstripe.warrior.png 20:30, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading and lowered the opacity just a bit -- 20:44, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes should be pale yellow, not white, and the base colour should be darker. 21:02, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Should match now :3 -- 21:28, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and does her eye have a pupil? o3o 21:51, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading. If I blur it anymore it will disappear. I also changed the hue of the shading. -- 16:39, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Add more of the iris (color) over the black part of her eye. ouo 22:59, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Eye color/style is artist's choice. 23:05, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, Last time I colored over the lineart (Eye) I was told to put it back to normal.. I love to do the eyes and add lots of depth and color but I don't have much to work with with the warrior blank unless I go over the lineart. So I Can go over the lineart? -- 23:45, May 23, 2012 (UTC)

No, don't go over the lineart. It's fine the way you have it. 23:46 Wed May 23

Re-uploaded Blurred the shading, and changed her color to more of a yellow to match her queen, and I changed her shading color to more of a yellow. -- 00:07, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- 00:27, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, you can go over eye lineart if you want, Raven. 09:08, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I went over some of the the eye lineart. Personally I think it looks much better, I think it adds more life :3 -- 13:34, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shadin. Skt Like a baws  14:09, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Thats really strange. The comment between Pouncey and Dazzle's comment is the most recent upload. No idea how it got there o.o -- 22:12, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, it kinda gets lost in the shading. 23:23, May 24, 2012 (UTC)

This is just my opinion, but I still find the stripes just a tiny bit white.-- 23:00, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine.

Re-uploaded -- 04:14, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can ya define the stripes a tad? Skt Like a baws  04:30, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Defined the stripes :3 -- 10:23, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a leeetle more? 18:44, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

The shading seems fine. o3o 19:32, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad. Skt Like a baws  23:06, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened the shading a tad -- 00:33, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Stonepelt (W) - Redone
Redone because of shading issues. It took me forever to get the stripes the same as the other. OTL Comments? Breeze whisker  05:43, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Because images never want to show up on my computer. Here. Breeze  whisker  05:45, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/lighten the shading a bit, and thinnen some stripes as well as adding more stripes into the body. (Even though this is the opposite side of the warrior... If that makes sence o3o) 06:24, 25, 05, 2012

Define the earpink. 18:06, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I thinned the stripes, defined the earpink, and blurred the shading, but I'm not adding more stripes. It's the exact same number as one the old warrior and this was redone for the shading, nothing else. Breeze whisker  04:25, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading just a bit more? 12:25, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  03:46, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Q) ~ Tweaked
Well, even though it's listed as a redo, all I really did was slap on some more shading. I'll do a total redo if needed, but...*shrugs*. 09:56, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I think a total redo would be good, so long as you keep the same style. The shading's pretty blotchy. 13:57, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made some adjustments, but the pattern's the same for the most part. 22:06, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Can you blur the stomach shading? 22:08, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading. Skt Like a baws  22:13, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:15, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading. o3o 01:35, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:12, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly "highlight" and/or blur the shading. It looks a bit flat. 15:28, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (E) ~ Redone
The reasons are on the nomination page. -lazy- OAs be Mosswisker&Stealthfire with a tweak by Silver. Skt Like a baws 00:59, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blah, his nose... xP Define the shading 83  01:38, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I like to think he licks it up. 8D Skt Like a baws  01:51, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

darken the shading and blur the earpink. <3 -- jack  never let go,   diane ❤''' 18:24, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Runningbrook (W) - Redone
- Oh celestia, it's been so long since I did a charart so excuse if it's a bit...um...off. Anyways, it had to be redone to match the apprentice (more stripes needed?) OA was Echomist with a redo by Leaf-storm. Comments? 15:07, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes to make it match the apprentice more. 15:16, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Also add more stripes and darken them. And blur the shading. 15:18, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I didn't darken the stripes because when I did, they got too dark. 15:30, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink and blur is a bit. This is beautiful. <33 15:32, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I re-did the earpink all together because I found this amazing tool called the path tool. And thanks, darling. <3 15:41, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by her chest. 17:33, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

there's waste on her back as well -- jack  never let go,   diane ❤''' 18:24, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll go along with both your statements... there's waste around the entire image. Ah, Icy, I missed your work. 'tis beautiful. <3

Re-Uploaded: I deleted as much waste as I could. And thanks Kelsey. <3 01:39, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a little more. 12:44, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Also enlarge it. And blur and darken the stripes even more~ 15:27, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred and enlargened earpink, blurred and darkened stripes. 18:08, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Morningstar (L)- Tweaked
OA was the ever talented and dearly missed Night Shine. He was nominated for shading issues. I realize that there is waste, I'm gonna go ahead and take care of that now. When you don't see waste on the left sde (his right) then you'll know I've taken care of it. 04:13, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the chest and tail shading a bit? ^^  15:01, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur the haunch shading a bit. <3 16:22, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like he's missing a pixel on his right eye. 22:48, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Alt. Lo) ~ Tweaked
Yup, added underbite. OA was moi. Comments? 04:21 Mon May 28

Quite lovely. Could you maybe get rid of that line that goes from right behind the tooth to the bottom of the jaw? Unless that's a whisker or something. Breeze whisker  04:26, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

It's a whisker, the lineart got all weird looking when I made the jaw but I'm not sure how to fix it without thickening the whisker. 04:37 Mon May 28

That looks like an Overbite.. I thought an underbite is when the lower jaw is further back than the upper jaw? -- 14:54, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

No, underbite is when the "under", or lower jaw ticks out. Over is when the top jaw does. :) 15:37, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe you could get rid of the bottom whisker, cause it looks like it's growing right by her jaw. O.o Skt Like a baws  21:41, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Merp I don't know if I should edit the lineart o.o 21:42 Mon May 28

Poppyfrost (W)~ Tweaked


She needed shading to be defined, and i blurred the bottom of her ear-pink a bit, it wasn'ts as blurred as the rest, and there was a transparent thing on her tail, so i fixed that to. OA was sandstar12, with a redo by Iceheart22. Comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 07:08, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define it a ton more. I can still barely see it. 15:26, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Upload this over the original file; don't create another. 15:56, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (E) ~ Tweaked
Needed an under bite =3 Comments? 12:59, May 28, 2012 (UTC) Forgot to fix the jaw.. I'll fix that soon. 15:06, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe give the tooth some shading (for lack of a better word) by darkening the two bottom pixels on the tooth? ^^;; 15:36, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (E) - Tweaked
She needed to be darker (finally)... OA was Hawktalon. 23:01, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Graypool (Ki) - Tweaked
Graykit. ouo Tweaked to make darker...The latest OA was Misty, but there was also Cinder, Pantherstorm, and Brightheart345. Comments? owo  ☾    T    w    e    e    ☽   Cannonsinthedistance~ 23:40, May 28, 2012 (UTC)