Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Webfoot (A) ~ Redone
OA was the beautiful Tatum. Comments? 02:41, 24, 11, 2012

Can you make the stripes match Berry's image more? Maybe add the stripe of black that goes from his head down to the tip of his tail? 18:26, November 24, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, stuff has come up and I can't work on this anymore. Withdrawing. x.x 03:13, 26, 11, 2012

Taking over; re-uploaded omaigawdthisfailsosbad 08:32 Mon Nov 26

There be waste~

Re-uploaded 09:14 Tue Nov 27

Define the shading and make the stripes ever so slightly less messy to match. 20:42, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

I think he should have a gray nose, as he's gray. x3 23:56, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

That's optional on gray cats. :b Just required on black. 20:39, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (A) ~ Withdrawn
OA was LeafstrikeAsakura, and I moved teh eye. 10:15 Sat Nov 24

Is there a way you can add a little depth on the missing eye? 05:35, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

I created it the same way the missing eye was before, but if anyone else agrees, I'll do so. 05:36 Sun Nov 25

I agree with Breezy. 08:38, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken the pupil a little. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:17, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on Webfoot's elder. 05:48 Tue Nov 27

I'll take over, if that's OK Stormy  I'm messing with you ♥ 23:36, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

You can't take over since you're not in the project. This is still open if somebody wants it. 23:05, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

May I take over? 00:33, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Brambleberry (MC) ~ Redone
OA is Echomist, with a tweak by Ivy. Redone for multiple reasons. (meh I don't like this, I think I might redo it)

Expand the shading on the back of the shoulders a bit. 05:34, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing image and giving her to Ivy.

Reuploaded Alrighty...how's this? I incorprated parts of Cloudy's design and made a furry effect. I love this :D 06:37, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her a lot, she's still very gray. 08:36, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can only lighten the shading so much before she looks flat, so is this better? =) 18:50, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

If you're redoing it and want a bit of realism, I'd add in a few stripes since spotted cats always have stripes. But that's just me, no need to take my advice. I'd say add a second layer of shading to give it more depth. 19:05, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

She's still pretty grey. Maybe try expanding the highlights? 22:07, November 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Shelly, I would, but Rain's to-be tweak nomination to have stripes because she was flecked was declined, so I don't know if everyone would be ok with her having tabby points. 19:28, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather her not have the tabby points. In the only official artwork we have for her, she's shown /without them/, and from what I remember, they're totally optional here. Now, onto the image itself. This is beautiful... but can you define where the ear pink is? It's kinda hard to tell.

Reuploaded 19:46, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if you meant to, or if it's my screen or what, but the highlights look tinted yellow Ca  na  di  a~  Sirius is hiding... 23:53, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

It's not a problem if they are (though I don't see it). Shading and highlights are tinted on images all the time. Anyways, sorry ivy but this still looks gray. I wouldn't be making such a fuss about it, but considering that was one of the main reasons it was nominated, it really needs to be fixed. 20:37, November 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Personally, I think it looks flat now, but what do you guys think? 23:25, November 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks kinda flat. Try adding another layer of shading so that it is more defined in the darker places. 03:00, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

It's wasn't that you had to lighten the shading, it was that you had to make it not gray. There is a difference. A good way to make it still white with darker shading is to have it not so blurred, or make the shading a bit... thinner.... not sure how to describe it, but put less of it, then blur it like normal. Just so thin layers of shading don't cover everything. 20:26, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? :3  02:22, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Broken Shadow - Tweaked
Darken the shading, OA was me 01:07, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit or tone down the highlights please. =) 02:48, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

The coloring and stripe pattern really doesn't match the sharpclaw very well... Also, lighten the shading.

Blur the shading and I think there's some blurred lineart on the arm closest to us. Also, you forgot the the white paws. Define the depth in the eyes too? 21:12, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Will anyone throw a fit if I just redo it? 22:08, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Nope. I certainly won't. Go right ahead, Scar.

Re-uploaded Wahhh!!! Don't look at it! It's ugly!  02:00, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Cloud With Star in Belly (E) ~ Tweaked
So I tried making her pale gray, and I defined the shading. OA I believe was 'Teldy. c: ew she looks ugly and blotchy 22:29, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Possible blur the shading and make the earpink less red and mre pink. =) 23:55, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt.Q2) ~ Withdrawn
Redone for multiple issues. ayusdfdf shading 22:45, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a few pixels of waste right past her neck. Beautiful, Skt. 23:54, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the front leg's shading. 00:35, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 07:38, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing because I just don't have the will to continue 01:59, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over 8D 02:00, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Mosskit (Ki) ~ Redone
OA of the most recent version was Ivyheart, I think. Had multiple issues and would be better off redone. Don't ask me to darken the gray, as she's pale gray and white.

Briarlight (A) ~ Tweaked
OA was Rainface, and I tweaked it. Redid the shading.

Stick (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for raggedness and...scrapiness....xD 02:53, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Stick (W) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for the same as the rogue...I tried with the colour... 02:53, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart(Ki) - Redone
Redone for color, OA is the wonderful deputy Cloudy. I got all colors from Scarlet. Comments? =D 03:18, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripes. ^^ 03:26, December 1, 2012 (UTC)