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Rosepetal (W) - Declined
She needed to be brought back to the color she was before to match her other images, and actually be dark cream. I need to fix some shading, I know. I'll do that in the next upload. Breeze whisker  21:26, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, define it, and make it more triangular. 22:16, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe tinge the shading browner/redder. She looks kinda ashy/gray. 00:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. (Yes, the highlights are tinted green.) Breeze  whisker  00:56, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the base just a tad? It doesn't quite match the other two images.

Make the earpink more triangular and a tad smaller. 01:03, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/redden the ear-pink 03:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That's all I'm going to do with the earpink. Breeze whisker  17:37, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and perhaps make it thinner around the back area. 21:01, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

I think the shading along her back looks fine...but maybe define the shading on her legs a tad? 01:18, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breeze  whisker  04:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you add a bit more shading to the back of her head and ears? 16:22, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Breeze whisker  05:32, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

I know you said that's all you were going to do with the earpink, but I can barely see it. Can you at least define it a little? 15:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a smidge. 03:45, 08, 07, 2012

Sorry, but this has been up for far longer than a week. Declined. 05:53, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Declined
Needed ragged fur (Changes may not be showing yet) Ohgawd I killed it Comments? 01:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. -- 16:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the ragged-ness? O_o Maybe make it match her queen? 16:22, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, wouldn't her fur be a bit more ragged as both a loner and rogue, probably from the fighting, and all of that?

True, but I think it could be toned down just a tad. XD Skt Omnia vincit amor 20:18, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 04:47, 01, 07, 2012

Blur the tail shading. Nice job, Stoner. 21:00, July 1, 2012 (UTC)

Wait - should I tone down the furriness or not? I dunno...but I kinda think that the queen has a little bit of raggedness... 23:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know, but it makes more sense for her to be fluffier when she's outside a Clan and doesn't care about her appearance. I think it should stay... 23:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should tone it down just a tad. Yes she'd be more ragged outside the Clan, but this is going a bit overboard. 22:10, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the fur looks fine, I've even seen strays that look like that. -- 18:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

It should be toned down. This is very ragged-y. xD 23:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I agree; the ragged-ness should be toned down. Even if she IS outside the Clan, it's far too much. 01:49, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

This has been up for a week too... Sorry, but I have to decline it. 05:58, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ratscar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
All I did was add the torn ear and scar, of which came from the warrior. OA was Silver. Comments?  11:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink and make it more pinkish? It looks gray right now. 15:36, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:53, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

I hate to complain about something that you just fixed, but could you redden the earpink? It looks too pale to me.... but the rest of this image is positively beautiful, really! :) 00:01, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

If it gets anymore red then it will be hard to see against the base coat. I think it's fine. 03:24 Thu Jul 5

Re-uploaded Thickened the scar...I thought it didn't match the warrior's very well o3o  11:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thicken it a bit more? :3 03:30, 06, 07, 2012

Enlarge the earpink and possibly make it the same color as the scar? 22:44, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) - Tweaked
OA was me, needed to be longhaired. Sorry I just realized a small part got cut off. Don't worry, Ivypool is next. Low battery, sorry. 21:38, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random white pixel on her chest. 22:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Her tail looks sorta flat...could you define/remove some shading...or add a "highlight"? OwO 22:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the body shading. 03:59, 04, 07, 2012

I say while this is up, the ear-pink closest to us should be blurred a bit, (Unless its my lap top). -- 08:57, July 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's a random black dot on her right paw... 00:02, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

That random black dot is lineart. However it does seem to be too thick. 02:15, 05, 07, 2012

Reuploaded Well, I managed to find her old .xcf so I redid what I've already previously done with this tweak. In all honesty, it makes me life tons easier. And if this is the correct version, then yes I see the waste and I fully intend to kill it  02:25, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

She's got a little waste by her paws, and in front of her tail. 20:56, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I already had pointed that out and said I'd take care of it  22:07, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the tail looks a bit flat - can you darken it? :3  22:45, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (W) - Tweaked
OA was me, tweaked for jacked up ears and a shading tweak. I hate how the new shading looks, she looks silver now. I might redo the ears and everything when I get ahold of my flashdrive. Meh. 21:43, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading just a bit?

There's some waste leaking out of the ears. 22:19, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading. 22:19, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes aren't showing. Alright, I found the old .xcf file, which means I had to redo getting rid of the blurred lineart and redoing the sliced ears (which I wasn't happy with them anyway). However, old .xcf means a better way of defining the shading ^^ 01:50, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around her, and a bit at the top...^^; 20:55, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks blotchy around the haunch, can you fix that? 21:48, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Of course, the other one wasn't the original and someone else got the waste. Egh that was so stupid of me 22:05, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's some waste by the feet and a little at the muzzle :3 18:53, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Erm...changes aren't showing. I checked the file on GIMP and there's no waste. I'll try again to see if it shows up  19:19, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Ro) - Tweaked
OA was Paleh, and she needed to be... floofy? I dunno. Ohgawd why do I fail so much. 22:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

If we decided that the loners ragged fur had to be toned down, then this should probably too. o3o 02:19, 05, 07, 2012

Re-uploaded. Eh. 14:53, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing (Q) ~ Tweaked
OA was Mistyheart, with a failed tweak by me. I re-did the shading, because let's face it; that last one sucked.

If you redid the shading on a solid cat..... how's it tweaked. 0.o 01:18, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Oh it was your image. Nevermind. Blur the shading then. 01:19, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

And add a light source. 01:28, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ....

Blur the shaing on her stomach and shoulders. 20:49, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I can't blur it. Otherwise, I'll get told to define it again.

Can you define the haunch shading a bit? 23:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine, actually. ^^;; These white cats are a pain as it is...

You won't get told to define it again, please blur the stomach shading. 20:44, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't blur it anymore. I also lightened it.

Define the tail shading a tad. Skt Omnia vincit amor  23:04, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.

Thrushpelt (W) - Tweaked
It looks redone, but I swear on my life that it isn't. Anyways, OA was Sandy with a re-do by me, and I redid the white patch, shading, fixed the earpink, and I added a fur texture. don't kill me, I like the texture  Comments for improvement? 22:21, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste under his butt. 22:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up th:e texture just a tad and define it on his tail. Skt Omnia vincit amor 23:03, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded:  01:07, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the fur texture more? It seems like he is two colors now. 01:57, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also make the actual lines for the fur smaller and add more? He looks mottled to me 02:39, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

And darken the overall shading as well. 23:18, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink if you want. o3o 23:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Willowpelt (W) ~ Redone
Willowpelt! In icon for half of the wwiki shippings! ...Anyway redone because of blotchy shading. OA was Leaf-storm and someone before but I don't know. Comments? 01:01 Fri Jul 6

Blur and lighten the shading. 01:05, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes might not be showing. 01:17 Fri Jul 6

Blur the earpink just a tad. Lovely~ 01:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thank you 8D 01:38 Fri Jul 6

Blur the shading a liiittle bit. 01:39, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Photoshop won't let me blur it anymore :/ 01:43 Fri Jul 6

Can you lighten the tail shading a little, please? 02:38, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Kinda new to this shading style x.x 02:47 Fri Jul 6

Smooth out that area between the front and hind leg. If it won't let you blur it anymore, try alternating between a very soft brush and eraser. Breeze whisker  04:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:21 Fri Jul 6

Blur the earpink a bit. 23:29, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Merp I think the earpink is fine o3o;; 23:32 Fri Jul 6

Lighten up dat shading. 00:20, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:00 Sat Jul 7

Define the shading some. Looks too close to a gradient now IMO. 20:43, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ._. 21:41 Sat Jul 7

Heavystep (A) - Tweaked
Ugh. This is frustrating me so much. I just cannot make this guy look three-dimensional. Anyway, I tweaked his shading to make it look less flat. I tried to smudge the stipes more to match the other images better, but that just looked worse. Comments would be much appreciated. ;n; Breeze  whisker  04:35, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading just a bit more. All hail Heavystep~

Define the earpink. o3o 23:28, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Could you possibly add some depth to his eyes? 19:47, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Bleh I fails right now x.x I gave him shaggy fur. Cloudy sent me the file and told me to kill the shading. Comments? 07:24 Fri Jul 6

Blur the face shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 14:10, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 19:25 Fri Jul 6

Blur the shading on his neck. 20:49, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes might not be showing. 21:12 Fri Jul 6

Can you define the earpink? 22:47, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Er it's the same from before, I think it's fine o3o 22:55 Sat Jul 7

Adderfang (W) - Redone
Multiple issues. OhmygodI'msoproud<3 OA of the most recent version was Cloudy. Thanks to everyone who watched the join.me! I don't think changes are showing; look here. 21:35, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I know you worked hard on this (I watched) but you need to lighten up the shading a little bit. I can barely see the pelt where the shading is. Other than that you may want to darken the ear-pink, but that´s just me. Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!  22:19, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading's fine, Sandstorm. 22:22, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty! Just an opinion, feel free to ignore, but maybe thicken the shading just a touch on the shoulder/neck 23:11, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Thanks though 8D 02:18, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Shading needs defining and blurring on the shoulder. This is really pretty. <3 Breeze  whisker  05:32, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Is it me or did part of his ear get cut off? o.O Skt Omnia vincit amor 14:06, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Breezy :) Skt, it's just you... o.o 14:55, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink a bit. 20:09, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

I see it too. The tip of the far ear looks flat. o.o 20:23 Sat Jul 7

Re-uploaded. Ah. You're right 8D 05:00, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Clawface (A) - Tweaked
See above ^^ OA was Cinder 22:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

He's still a bit weird. Maybe desaturate it a little? Breeze whisker  05:35, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

It kinda looks less saturated than the warrior o.o 20:22 Sat Jul 7

Re-uploaded 21:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
Needed to darken shading, define earpink, and blur facewhite. OA was some crazy person. 23:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and define the shading. 23:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. 23:47, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 01:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white on the muzzle some more. 18:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hate the shading with a firey passion. I miss GIMP :( 21:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights(?) and the shading looks flat, try defining it more. 22:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (Q) ~ Tweaked
8D Wee Shading needed darkening. Comments? And I kinda want the darkness of the shading to stay like this... xD File changes are probably not showing. 00:07, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat neck and tail shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor  00:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) ~ Tweaked
Had a weird light source, so I just redid the shading. OA was me. Changes aren't showing yet. 01:29, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading.

Shrink the earpink a bit. 20:06, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Defined the tail shading and I think the earpink is fine, but if anyone else agrees, I'll change it. Changes aren't showing. 22:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Mossfire (W) ~ Redone
Was redone for shading and smudge issues. OA was Hiddensun with a redo by Mistystar139. Skt Omnia vincit amor 02:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the ginger a little more. 02:42, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ginger's fine... 02:46, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the fur texture so she doesn't look mottled? 03:18, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink just a touch and thicken the shading around the belly. And, this is just a style opinion so feel free to ignore, maybe add a bit of white, she's giving the impression of a black and brown cat rather than a tortie. 03:48, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uplaoded. I tried to do it without the white, but it always looked dumb, so here. Skt Omnia vincit amor 07:25, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Slightly define the shading... but this could just be me. <span style="">04:14, 08, 07, 2012

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
This was redone for the same reasons as the warrior. OA was Silver. I feel bad doing this one ._. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Omnia vincit amor 08:03, July 7, 2012 (UTC)\

So much better <3. Define the values in the eyes a bit. 12:18, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail shading. So pretty<3 21:12, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and blur the haunch shading. Nice textures, Skt! Sandy   I think   Daddy's   my slave!   22:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink matches the other images, Sand. it's fine. ^^;;

Sagewhisker (MC) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked to have longer whiskers. Most recent OA is Silver. Comments? 14:10, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I found some evil waste and killed it. x.x 14:14, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make them a little longer. You can ignore this. o3o 19:58, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Like Featherwhisker's ears c: 20:18 Sat Jul 7

Reuploaded. Might've made them a bit too long...owo And Mounty, you fail. XD They're whiskers. 20:43, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (A) - Tweaked
Lovely Teldy gave me the file, so it was an easy tweak. Colors are from the warrior/deputy now, so I'm not changing them. And the lineart's from her alt apprentice. So pretty much the only thing touchable is the shading. :P OA was Teldy and it needed to match the other images. Comments? 21:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 21:26, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done 21:37, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

There's a pixel or two of lineart sticking off of her torn ear. 05:40, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Otterheart (W) - Redone
More or less redone. OA was me. Shading made me wanna gag. Comments? 21:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Willowpelt (A) ~ Tweaked
Well, wouldn't you know it? Apparently this is one of mine that I forgot I did. xD So, it turns out I could tweak it instead of redoing it. All colors come from Mounty, so I'd rather not change them.

Define the shading and blur it on the haunch. 05:39, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eww.

Pinestar (Alt. L) - Tweaked
Oh... That looked so much better in photoshop... Anyway, shading and highlights needed to be tweaked. I also added depth in the eyes. 02:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights. 04:59, July 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his legs, maybe? Breeze whisker  05:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)