Warriors Wiki talk:Charart

Folder for images that had been up for approval before the beginning of Tweak Week.

Bluestar (W) - Redone
So, I re-did the image, and I am sorry, but I do not know who made the image before. I wasn't sure if I should add the scar, so please tell me if I should. εСћб ђэάѓτ  11:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

i think should not cause was it seen on her leader or older warrior image? otherwise this is really good apart from the shading under the neck that i think is supposed to be there but i dont know  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 12:42, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading, ♥Ice  shine★  15:07, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I darkened the shading and blurred the highlights. εСћб ђэάѓτ  16:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really nice, but perhaps make the ear pink a bit bigger? insane brick'd 16:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto insane. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:33, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made ear pink bigger. How's it now? εСћб ђэάѓτ  17:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Midriff shading needs serious blurring. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   18:14, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Is it okay? εСћб ђэάѓτ  18:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing. The blue is a little dark--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:38, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit, she looks very dark compared to her other images Night  Fall 18:39, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

She's supposed to have a silver tinged muzzle and tail tip.XxdovesongXX 07:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

She only had the silver muzzle and tipped tail because she was getting old. I don't think it's needed on her warrior image, because she is still young--  Night s h i n e    ~  07:21, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made her lighter. εСћб ђэάѓτ  10:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading the back leg. ♥Ice shine★  15:59, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It could still be lightened more. I think the colour should be similar to her kit and apprentice images--  Night s h i n e    ~  17:42, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћб ђэάѓτ  22:30, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit too bright, try desaturating it some Night  Fall 17:10, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad, and make the muzzle silver. Dawny  19:40, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can you add the silver tipped tail? Mõŏń    ۞   03:59, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was after she got old Night  Fall 06:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

blur haunch shading. ♥Ice shine★  14:52, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink just doesn't seem right for this colour pelt. Perhaps take it from another blue-ish cat with a more natural colour. Maybe Mistystar? -- Sandy star 19:56, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I changed the earpink to look more like Mistystar's, I blurred as much as I could, and I desaturated it. I didn't add the silver tipped muzzle and tail because that was when she got older. εСћб ђэάѓτ  12:32, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

She's should be more of a gray color. Darkhallows... Mew? 18:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree with Shady; she needs to match the colour of her other images. Using the desaturate tool should do the trick and then redo the ear pink and eye colour. -- Sandy star 08:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Darken the shading ♥Ice  storm★  12:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Stoneclaw (W) - Tweaked
Okay, so I got rid of the mottled parts, (if you didn't notice, some mottled spots were there) re-did the shading, added highlights, and re-did the ear pink. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do that...but, comments? ♥Ice shine★  14:26, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I dont see anything that needs fixing or the mistakes are hardly seen to me so good job  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 14:32, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink could be a bit longer. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ T e n s o u ! 17:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Goldenpaw on the ear pink. Also, blur the highlights a bit more. Echo star  Getting a tan 17:30, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Made ear pink longer. I can't blur the highlights. ♥Ice shine★  17:37, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are a bit too concentrated, and the highlight on the shoulder should be a tad bit taller. Blur the ear pink some more.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 17:56, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Iceshine★ 19:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the haunch just a little bit; it's still too concentrated.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:37, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:  ♥Ice shine★  19:54, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and blur it--  Night s h i n e    ~  00:25, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Ice  shine★  03:26, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more--  Night s h i n e    ~  04:48, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

It can't blur it. ♥Ice shine★  13:38, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit, otherwise this is really good!  Dawny  01:04, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I lightened the ear pink and blurred it, as I forgot to upload it when Night mentioned it. ♥Ice shine★  14:29, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Errm, the shading still looks a bit bright. It's very nice though.XxdovesongXX 19:48, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is bright? ♥Ice shine★  21:40, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Dovesong meant the highlights. I don't think they're too bright though. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  18:37, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

They still need blurring. They are too circular. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   22:46, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: ♥Ice  shine★  14:56, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The haunch and face highlight look fine but the one in the middle still looks off. Maybe make it a bit longer. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  15:04, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sloefur (D) - Redone
The shading needed blurring, but no matter how much I blurred it it just wouldn't fix the blotchiness of the shading, so I ended up redoing the shading. Since I ended up redoing it, I went ahead and added highlights, too. Comments and suggestions?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:18, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. The whole image seems a little dark. Maybe lighten it a tiny bit--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:24, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the image. ♥Ice shine★  19:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:31, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink. Lighten it more--  Night s h i n e    ~  19:32, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't want to lighten it too much more because then it'll get more of a gray color than a pink or red.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:41, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. Ashshadow. StormClan's strongest  19:49, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Either this ear pink is killing me, or I'm just full of total ear pink failure today. D:  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 19:59, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I have that problem too xD. I don't think it needs to be defined, so much as it needs to be more pink. Darkhallows... Mew? 20:08, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried a lot of different things to get the ear pink right before finally saving, and this ended up being the best...I think.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 22:52, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should just redo the ear pink. Other than that, the image is perfect--  Night s h i n e    ~  00:24, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I did multiple times. :/ I'll try again, though. Should I make it a reddish color or a pinkish color? (Or should I get the exact same color as another image, and if so, which one?)  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 02:58, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe change the eye color to a lighter blue  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 20:47, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine. ♥Ice shine★  14:49, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Which color do you suggest for the ear pink, Ice?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 20:02, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should try this color code - 8f5656 Try that. ♥Ice shine★  20:06, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The color Ice gave me was way too light, so I used the same color as I did on my Coal image. How is this?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 21:17, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's better. Darken the shading a bit ♥Ice  shine★  02:01, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to originally have it a bit darker, but if I darken it, the line between shading and highlights will be too fine, and it will never blur enough, so I don't think I should darken the shading, but if anyone else does then I will.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 03:04, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Maye just darken the shading on the paws, the legs farthest from us, the neck, and the base of the tail. Night Fall 21:25, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened all of the shading, but I think I ruined it. All I did was darken the shading, not the entire image, but it looks like I darkened the entire image...it didn't look like this in pixlr or photoshop, though. Oh well, comments?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 15:20, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe thining the shading will help. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  15:43, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Do you mean the shading on the neck and midriff? That's the only thick shading there is on the image, and the rest is highlights except for the shading on the paws and tail base. Or should I just lighten the entire image a little bit since it looks darker now?  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 20:10, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Just lighten the entire thing a bit. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  20:19, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 21:45, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar (R) - Redone
I think it's not my best. . . but Ok. ❦✌Mo   us  et  al  on❦✌   !! It's tooHOT!   23:02, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks really cool! Add some more stripes, and darken the cream patches Night  Fall 23:10, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Blur the stripes too, and some lineart on the head is missing. ♥Ice shine★  23:27, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should compare it to the other images. her cream and brown are much darker, and the patches are more blurred. Good job, though :)XxdovesongXX 07:23, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Desaturate the lighter cream patches, they are a bit too bright. Dawny  00:53, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Also, darken chest shading. ♥Ice shine★  22:07, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I didn't change the colors because I got them from her leader image. And the stripes are the way they are because I tried to make them like the warrior image. And I based the stripes off of that image, so I didn't add them. And I can't do much about the blurring. Pixlr sucks. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   00:50, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really know what to tell you than. The cream is too noticable, so darkening it might not be a bad idea. That small bit of line art on the forehead is still missing too. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  01:45, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Helping out
To re-do an charart, do we have to be the one who made it? Or can we just pick one and go? ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 15:48, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Actually since we are apprentices we dont do chararts we can only comment and that but yes for warriors to re do a char art you can pick one and edit it (As long as someone does not have it reserved) or if you did make it go right a head as long as someone does not have it reserved  Birdstar  To the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 16:02, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudspots (MC) -Redone
Sandstar12 did the original image. Anyways shading was to hard to fix, so I just redid him,comments?  Dawny  18:20, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

lol. I deeply apologise for the awful image you had to try and edit, and thank you for taking on such a task. This looks nice; just add some highlights to the herbs and blend the shading a little more. -- Sandy star 18:25, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions a bit more and darken the ear pink a tiny bit--  Night s h i n e    ~  18:41, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Run the burn tool over the whole image once or twice Night  Fall 20:37, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the tail shading. ♥Ice shine★  21:26, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred the shading, fixed the ear pink, darkended the image,highlighted the herbs, and blurred the white parts, anything else? Dawny  23:16, July 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading ♥Ice  shine★  14:33, July 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blurred chest shading.  Dawny  01:51, July 9, 2010 (UTC)

The front paw closest to us should be darkened a bit-- n i g h t  s h i n e  04:09, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the front paw.  Dawny  03:05, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail, haunch and back. =) -- Sandy star 08:33, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Small Request
Can I please make a tiny request that when putting an image up for approval you put next to the name either 'Tweaked' or 'Redone' depending on whether the image was down for a ful make-over or some simple tweaking. May I also ask that you adhere to what the image was down for please; if it needed shading blurred then that is what you do and it would be nice to mention this in the post so people know that that is what they can comment on. I don't know about anyone else but it is confusing me what I can and can't comment on for a particular image and for the senior team, whether a full 24 hour call is needed.

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===Warriorclaw (W) - Tweaked=== Shading needed blurring. ~

Sorry to sound picky, but we need to remember that we are only tweaking things that have been nominated for, and this is getting gard to monitor because people are not making it clear. -- Sandy star 12:42, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Ki)- Redone
Original artist was me. Color change to a more ginger color. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  16:47, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good. Darken the shading. ♥Ice shine★  17:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Ice. Anything else? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:38, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure, but it may not be as pale as her new queen image. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 22:50, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thats where I got the color from. Shading takes up more room on a kit than on a queen. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  22:54, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe, brighten the highlights-- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:02, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

I don't highlight shorthaired kits. It just doesn't work for me. I lightened the shading though. Better? Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:16, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

back for a while
since its summer again id have more time to work on some chararts so can i rejoin? i might leave after summer though owobracken- 19:12, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, you can rejoin. I'll add you back in now; though right at this moment we're engaged in Tweak Week, so the normal rules don't apply. Please read the guidelines if you haven't already done so. --Bram ble 14:36, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefang (W) - Tweaked
Gah, this sucks. Comments and/or critique?--Shaf Girl  23:21, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  23:23, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and darken the shading-- n i g h t  s h i n e  23:25, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear fathest from us a bit.  Dawny  23:26, July 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, darken it, and blur it. Add shading to the head. ♥Ice shine★  00:01, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ah noes... the <3 colour is being lost by the removal of the shading. Definitely darken it and thicken it. The original shading was the right colour, just needed extending to other areas. -- Sandy star 08:38, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I completely redid it.--Shaf Girl  17:11, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring. W   a  t  e  r   bender MouseHRULES!   19:36, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the muzzle and tail. ♥Ice storm★  12:11, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blackstar (L) Tweaked
Here's Shimmerpool's image tweaked a bit. I'm not very proud of this...it was really hard to darken and blur the shading because it was done with the square shaped burn tool, and I was using the round. Anyway, did my best to darken the shading. I also changed the ear pink and nose color, as they were both very purple. And I added the black ears. Note: I've seen his pictures, it's the back of his ears that are black, not the whole ear. Anyway, comments? :) Night  Fall 01:18, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred a bit of line art around the shoulder. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  01:38, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I fixed it

Smooth out the shading some more. The ear fur is a little odd looking. Make it fluffier-- n i g h t  s h i n e  02:01, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out out the shading and blur it. ♥Ice shine★  02:47, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to work :) But next time, remember that if someone has already told the artist what to do, you don't need to say it again :) Night  Fall 02:50, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I think it's better now. Night Fall 04:57, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink's shading looks odd. Also, it should be uploaded over the original picture. :) -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 05:04, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

How would I fix it? And my bad, I wasn't sure whether or not I should; sorry xD Night  Fall 05:07, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure. I think it just needs a bit more blurring. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 05:08, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better? I blurred and lightened it a bit Night  Fall 05:12, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

That's better. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 05:36, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Pouncetail (W)) - Tweaked
The original artist was myself. The shading needed fixing so I have done so. I had to darken the pelt colour to allow me to add more shading. -- Sandy star 12:50, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading ♥Ice  shine★  16:20, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Um, there is no back shading... which is kinda the point. The light source is coming from the top right. I could maybe mess with some highlights though. -- Sandy star 16:30, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Flametail (A) - Tweaked
Same deal as his MCA image - it needed to be made longhaired, so I filled in all the new fur tufts (or whatever you call them) but left the original color as much as possible. How is it? insane brick'd 13:17, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading a bit and lighten the ear pink-- n i g h t  s h i n e  17:40, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC) - Tweaked
I'm not sure who the original artist was The original artist was Mallinois. I blurred and extended the shading a little and made the hind leg broken. Constructments? -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 16:10, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken tail shading. ♥Ice shine★  16:19, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there is some exra lineart around the herbs. I like what you did with her hind leg. Ashshadow o r Creamsplash  16:20, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thickened the tail shading and fixed the herb lineart. Also, I checked in the approved archives and the original artist was Mallinois. -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 23:42, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. ♥Ice storm★  12:07, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) - Redone


I have to say this was a bit challenging to do...whoever came up with Spottedleaf's wacky but beautiful appereance, I hope they have a cat like her to prove it! lol...anywayz it was kind of fun to redo and I did my best matching the patteren to her apprentice image and used the colors from it as well. What do you guys think?--Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:09, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transitions more, lighten the ear pink, darken the shading.-- n i g h t  s h i n e  17:41, July 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded--Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:04, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the white on the muzzle-- ♥Ice storm★  12:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderheart (W) - Shading


The shading needed some help; added some highlights, perfected shading, changed eye, and blurred ear pink a bit. Original artist was myself. Further suggestions? --Bram ble 23:19, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it needs to be darkened. But right above the tail the shading is darker/less blurred than the rest. Darkhallows... Mew? 09:44, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. But I do think the tail shading could be darkened a tad. ♥Ice storm★  12:05, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I went with the consensus and didn't change the overall shading. Darkened and blurred the tail shading slightly. --Bram <span style="font-family:Segoe_Script;color:#000562; ">ble 14:26, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (Q) - Redone
Bleh. I doooooon't like this image. Good news: My tap number in a national comettion got third overall in the Pre-Teen Group :) Influx Lennon -   Ringo's Wife  23:22, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and darken the shading a bit. Make it a bit more sandy coloured, it looks a bit pink right now-- n i g h t  s h i n e  00:03, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  02:50, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more stripes-- ♥Ice storm★  12:04, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I I add anymore stripes, it won't look like Sandstorm anymore. I (think) I added the amount she has on her warrior image. Influx Lennon -  Ringo's Wife  13:17, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

may I join
Hi my name is willowwhisp and I was woundering if I could join. I can do some things, I know how to shade and highlight sand stuff like that. Do I need to prove anything? Am I good enough to join? -Willowwhisp 23:45, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, you can join:) Just make sure to check the guidelines before you begin and there are some tutorials to help with making chararts. Have fun:) -- H A W K T A L O N        ö 23:56, July 11, 2010 (UTC)

Do I start as an apprentice?

Sorry, I forgot to sign -Willowwhisp 00:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, you start as an apprentice. We're in the middle of a Tweak Week right now, and apprentices can't post up art, but you can still comment on images.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 00:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Question
I've been having vactions and such leaving me no time to get on. Was I kicked off? And if I was can I rejoin? Rubyblaze 00:45, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, you haven't been kicked off-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:42, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (K) - Tweaked (Redone)
Original image by FirePelt. Needed to be made consistent with her other images. It's technically a tweak, but there was no point in using the original image, so I just remade it. Suggestions? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 03:36, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the top of the head a bit.  Dawny  03:40, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 03:49, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition. Darken the tail and face stripes-- n i g h t  s h i n e  03:53, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Is this good? -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 04:02, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart around the paws. Also, even though it's technically a tweak, since you redid the image then put redone in the title rather than tweaked, because later it will need the 24 hour call, but tweaked images don't need it since they have already been approved, and this hasn't been approved before.  I c e  t h r  o a t  $  Puttin' on my shades   $ 04:09, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think I got it all. Someone needs to fix the lineart so it doesn't have it. -- Gοlδεnρεlτ 天の道を行き、総べてを司る男. 04:21, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the white paw-- ♥Ice storm★  12:06, July 12, 2010 (UTC)