Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Tweaking=

Russetfur (W) - Redone
Meh, Froon convinced me to get off my lazy butt and do a charart :] This charart was originally supposed to be tweaked, but I was having issues with the shading, so I just redid it :P 02:50, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink a bit more ;3 First Foxleap, and now Russetfur... We think alike cuz' ;D 03:19, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Change the file name to Russetfur.warrior.png so it replaces the old one. 03:21, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, the changes aren't showing xP Oh, and I can't make it a .png because my computer won't let me upload it if it's a .png. 03:58, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

And FYI, the changes don't show when I first put the picture there for me too, but they appear after you publish it. Odd. Lol. 04:19, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think you're meant to say who did the charart before it was tweaked? I believe it was Dawnleaf :D. This is really pretty. Lighten the earpink though and there is a garbage around the top of the tail, a brown pixel I think :3 This is good Nighty! ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 08:07, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Earpink looks really blotchy; I'll fix it in the next upload. 23:44, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

You should continue the stripes into the face, so it looks more natural instead of just the body and tail. 13:51, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

I honestly think that this looks amazing with or without stripes in the face. ;) But I think the ear pink could be blurred a little more; it seems to straight on the bottom edge to me. 21:26, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit. 16:45, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe try to lighten the ear pink just a bit? With her pelt color it is hard to see it. But other than that, the pelt, stripes, shading and blurring looks amazing!Fallenstars 04:29, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

If you can, could you make her a little more ginger, she looks brown to me. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:43, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

It looks close to the color it was before, I THINK it should stay the color it is, I may be wrong however. And there is a pixel outside her tail, get rid of that, this is a very lovely image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:57, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it to match her deputy image, and I can barely see the earpink, though defining it wouldn't be the answer, 'couse it's already sharp-edged. And who said she has stripes?- Kittycat79 Kitties Rule! 06:29, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

@Kittycat - She was never revealed to have stripes, but it isn't possible for a ginger cat not to have them. So basically we're tweaking all ginger cats to have stripes. 17:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nightflower left the wiki (says on her profile), so someone can take over this. 14:59, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Vinestar (L) ~ Redone


Original artist was Honeyfur, and I redid the shading, and ended up redoing the whole thing. 18:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

And changes aren't showing. 18:38, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Would it be possible to elongate the tail to match the description? (And personally I think the same should be done with Tallstar, as that's kind of what he's named for) 23:54, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:59, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

I reverted the image to the newer image, Misty. Mintstar, I don't think the shading needs to be blurred as you were looking at the old one. Add shading at the end of the tail (make it longer like Shellheart said) and add depth to the eyes. (darker and lighter pixels) 17:03, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Icy! I redid the whole tail, and made it a bit longer. Please don't make me make it any longer. I fail at lineart. D: 18:00, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good! Blur the shading, yes, because it looks blotchy. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 02:42, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I can't blur it any more.. 16:42, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more on his left (our left) ear; it looks flat. 22:51, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'd be happy to help with blurring the shading, but anyways, I would darken the shading a bit underneath his neck and near the top of the haunch. Nice work! 01:27, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

A few stray pixels above his ears, get rid of those. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:58, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 14:46, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the fur into earpink on the right --> a little more. Wild fire Hazelx Thorn!  22:30, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Petalnose (Q) - Tweaked
- Re-did did shading and brightened highlights. I tried a new way of doing shading, and I like it x3. Please don't tell me to blur the shoulder highlight. It can't be blurred anymore. 23:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's a bit dark compared to her other images. 23:56, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Nice! Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's because of the shading + highlights. Er, Re-Uploaded xD 00:38, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste around the charart around her haunch area. Make the earpink bigger. 01:04, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see the waste on GIMP 02:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can see it, want me to circil it for you? If not, It is under her foot, under her belly, near her foot, and above her back. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

OH I know why it isnt showing you, because, it is so pale, it looks like it isn't there, but if you lean in close, you can see it, it is there, but just BARLEY there. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:48, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

It is not there at all on GIMP. I can't fix it if I can't see it. 21:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

When I had a hard time seeing the waste on my Ivypool image, I put a colored background behind her as a new layer, maybe that could help you see it? Because I could never see it when people told me until I did that 22:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Where's the light source? I can't really tell... and darken the tail shading. 19:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's some shading waste above and below her back leg. 20:34, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I darkened the tail shading. Shellheart, I can't remove it because no matter how close I look in GIMP, it's not there. 13:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I can remove it for you, want me to? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:08, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm shall be gone until August 25th, so please don't decline this due to lack of work ;3 00:41, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I know it isn't your problem, but can you define the earpink? 16:59, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt. W) - Tweaked
The original artist was Feathermoon. I just made him gray. 03:19, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Darken the shading a tad and add/darken the shading under the chin. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 03:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:27, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I can see a bit of waste around the head and neck. Please erase it that this'll be pretty much ready. ♌The Star that cannot Return  to the Heavens ♌ 03:40, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yay. :) 03:47, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wouldn't it just be his default warrior image, since we went with the silver description only with his elder charart? 12:43, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around. But the image looks good! @Shellheart, Longtail's alt. warrior is for the period of time when he was not an elder, but he had been attacked by the rabbit and had scars. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:26, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

He was attacked in FQ, there is a slighty waste under his forepaw closest to us, and und his haunch, and darken the shading a tad, I can't see it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 15:55, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe. One of Feathermoon's chararts. xD Anyways, good job Rainy. I know you're not required to do this, but...umm... Can you thicken the lineart by the nick in his ear? It seems too thin. 18:30, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Other than that, it looks good. 19:00, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The waste isn't showing on my comp... Can you specify where I missed it? 04:17, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's some between the ears, along the spine, and on the underside of the tail. Maybe go into the shading layer and fill the background with a color to see if the waste shows up. That's what I do with Photoshop. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:12, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I won't be able to re-upload this until I get back next week. Did we decide on how long TW was being extended? 13:16, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I think it was said till the end of the month, not sure. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:23, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

There is a LOT of waste by the way, all the way around his cahrart, color the background, to see it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:25, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I use the layers too, that way you can easily see and erase the waste. There's some on the back. 17:19, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Graystripe (D) Tweaked
The entire image needed tweaking. So I re-did the stripe, darkened the highlights, fixed up the ear pink, and played with the shading. I also added depth in the eye. Comments? 16:04, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on his leg needs blurred, also the bottom of his haunch. 17:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights, make the stripe thicker, and blur it. Maple♥ pool  School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 17:36, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. 18:50, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

It says his left ear is torn, so tear that. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 17:54, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Tore his left ear, blurred the haunch shading, toned down the highlights, and tweaked the stripe. Comments? (By the way, on August 14th, if this isn't approved, I won't be able to work on this or any other of my images, considering that I'll be gone. Anyone can take over) 18:04, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste near his ear and back. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Removed. 20:41, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading a bit or darken the highlights. And I can't really see the stripe through all the shading, so maybe darken that too? Also, blur the shading a tad. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 20:57, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Im pretty sure that you tore the right ear,. not the left.Bluestar11796 22:28, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark, if you make the stripe much darker, it'll be pure black. Make it more like his warrior image and I think it'll be good :3 23:09, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are the changes showing? If they are, there is still a pixel by his ear. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I lightened the shading. 13:51, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. :3 15:53, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing, but Frostheart, I can't anymore. It's blurred to maximum. 15:55, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The stripe blends into the shading, define it. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.  22:34, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure you're supposed to tear the ear on HIS left, not our left. 18:00, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think the stripe could be a little darker, like his warrior image. I might be mistaken, though, because his warrior image has a little lighter shading. 19:37, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripe and thicken it. 18:05, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Amberclaw (W) - Tweaked
Hate this. I burned in stripes, and the original artist was Riverpelt. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 02:46, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are harder to see on the legs- define them please :) 02:48, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- darkened the shading, brightened the highlights, and redid the stripes. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:35, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

He's too bright, maybe desaturate him a little. 18:31, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading between the haunch and the front paw. 18:40, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:56, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights alot, they are far to bright. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:20, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 15:49, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the haunch highlight, please. Still too bright. 01:14, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- please don't make me dull the highlights down too much. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:56, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I preferably think that the highlights are fine. Anyways, I would taper the stripes a little. As in just use the smudge tool and carefully use it to make the stripes a bit....pointier....at the end. 15:38, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 19:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading, it looks blotchy. 18:37, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Changes may not be showing. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- changes may not be showing. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Quickpaw (A) - Redone
Original artist was Icethroat21, and I redid the shading and redid it as a tabby. I know this is over the page limit, but Mousefang (W) and Lionblaze (K) both should be archived. 19:02, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

There is blurred lineart. :3 00:25, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

The blurred linart is on the on right leg, the start of the haunch, and the chest. If anyone can point out more spots, then do so. 19:18, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix the whole lineart. Re-Uploaded. 14:47, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the legs and at the base of the tail. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 17:30, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Flametail (A) ~ Tweaked
Well, here he is. Mind you, it's hard to replicate what you have a rough time seeing. xD Original artist is Snowfeather, and it was then tweaked by Insane (who made it longhaired). 00:16, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Some of the stripes on his neck don't match his MCA. 00:20, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

* sighs* You have NO idea how annoying this is. Re-uploaded. 01:19, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you try making the stripes more visible? :3 02:18, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

If I make them any more visible, they're going to look out of place. I can try, I guess. 02:21, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Looks bad, I know. 02:25, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes where the shading is. Maybe take your burn tool and run over the layer with the stripes to darken them? Desaturate the ear-pink as well, please. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 18:21, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ear pink = not my problem (for the umpteen-millionth time). I've never used the burn tool, but I can give it a shot. 19:28, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? I didn't use the burn tool, but I have other methods. XD 19:42, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add one more stripe on the face? <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  22:05, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

No. I have to copy what's on the MCA image. 22:52, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Did you draw the stripes over the shading and highlights? Define the stripes on the tail. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:54, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the 2 face stripes. 17:00, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 16:25, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 00:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (K) - Redone
She needed to be redone as a long-haired and the original artist was FirePelt. 14:44, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Try reuploading over the old one. The new changes aren't even showing in the history, sadly. 18:26, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

They still aren't showing, but you can see it on the second file in her file history. xP

Blue the patches a touch. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 20:16, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Changes still aren't showing. 20:29, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

The patch on her face on the left (her right) needs to come down a tad to match her apprentice. 21:14, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste all around. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:52, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, define the earpink, and there's still waste near the right ear. 16:27, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes might not be showing for some of you. xP 18:16, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I can see it; it does n't have waste now. :D The right earpink looks a bit blotchy; smoothen it out. 18:47, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to be nit picky but on her apprentice charart, the gray patch isn't on her muzzle. On her right side of the face, the gray isn't supposed to be on her muzzle. Maybe smudge it up closer to her eye. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 17:34, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Adderfang (D)- Tweaked


Orginal artist was Honeyfur, I just made him mottled, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:55, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tabby stripes. Make the earpink bigger 02:00, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading a little more visible too. 02:02, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - I think I killed the image Dx Made the stripes a shade lighter, and darkeedn the shading, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:17, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:18, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are much better ^^. Except the shading still seems a little off. 02:27, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:34, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

 Repuloaded - fixed the shading, changes still not showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:36, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, Changes re showing now. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Straighten out the ear-pink, it looks a bit crooked xP. Blur the shading on the tail and on the chest. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I will upload it in the morning, I'm at my grandmother's and she doesn't have gimp, sadly Dx Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 03:02, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

This picture looks great and all, but it doesn't look like his warrior image anymore, which was approved like a couple weeks ago to look like the OLD deputy image. Should we keep that one then? It had spots, so it could kind of pass as mottled. No offence to Maplepool or anything, this picture is great, but should it be declined? The whole reason we tweaked the warrior was to make both his images match. Tweaking this will just bring that problem back. Just my opinion. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:18, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

he was needed to be mottled, but could we maybe tweak his warrior image agian? If not, if anyone else has a promblem with this image, I will take it down, but anyway  Reuploaded - fixed the ear-pink, anything else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:43, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so I asked Iceheart, and she said to tweak the warrior image again Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:48, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Alright then, sounds good. ^^ I might just reserve that if nobody else has...... Anyways, blur the earpink. :) ♥ Paleclaw  May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:51, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded -Blurred the ear-pink, what else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 14:41, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 16:22, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - Blurred the shading, wat else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:17, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks bit blotchy. Make it lighter, redder, triangularer, and blur it. 18:51, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - Fixed ear-pink. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:10, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Center it more and blur it. 21:32, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hows that? changes aren't showing Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 21:43, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart (A) ~ Tweaked (Redone)
Here's Brightheart's apprentice charart. I ended up redoing it to tweak the patches. Original artist was Sandy and then it was tweaked by Goldenpaw. Changes aren't showing up yet. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 02:59, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

She needs torn ears I think...all of her images except her kit image have torn ears. <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  12:37, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Do the ginger patches need stripes? <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:51, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make her long furred, it says she fluffy. I think they might need stripes, not sure. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 16:04, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think she needs stripes. It doesn't say in her description.... <font color="Aqua" face="Chalkboard" style="background:black">şŋσщđąẕẕℓε ѕeverυs ѕɴαpe.  17:28, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Since her patches are ginger, she probably needs stripes. It doesn't have to be in her description. 18:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

@Snowdazzle - She shouldn't have torn ears, for this isn't her alternate apprentice version, and she hadn't gotten attacked by the dog pack yet :3 22:38, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Her page doesn't have a reference for her being fluffy so I'm going to keep her short haired for now. I'll also ask a lead about her patches having stripes as well. Personally, I don't think they should, but they're easy to add. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:18, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Frosty said that I should add stripes, so I did. I still don't think that she needs them, but I'll go along with it. Changes aren't showing yet.... -.- <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:22, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. 19:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing up... -.- <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:49, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (D) - Redone
I don't like this one. ._. 15:07, August 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * God, I always forget original artist and blah. ._. Anyways, It was done by Morningleaf then tweaked by Ashshadow. It needed to have stripes, I think. :3 15:09, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sexy. xD blur the shading a tad. 15:13, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Make the earpink more visable, I can't see it Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 18:45, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match the leader image. 19:47, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Maplepool, I got the colour off his leader image, and @Iceheart: I tried copying them off his apprentice image, but it was kind of hard to make out the stripes. :3 I'll try making the stripes a bit duller ('cause I got the basic shape down and schtff...) xD 20:58, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are too triangular; the leader images' stripes aren't as straight. 19:11, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W) - Redone
My Ravenpaw image needs to be archived, so this isn't over the limit. Changes aren't showing. Original artist was Bramble, Shimmerpool, and tweaked by Moonflight. Her color was too bright. So I made her champagne colored, which is dark red. I don't like this, I think it either needs to be blurred somewhere or her shading is a little wonky (her chin shading) 19:13, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lightne her a tad, and brighten the highlights.(MUCH better, no offense to anyone.) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 19:18, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The pelt color or shading? I think I should lighten the shading, but just making sure what you mean :3 19:25, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

The shading, her pelt color is fine. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:32, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It should be the second one in the history 19:40, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

This looks too red, I think you should just make it dark ginger, which is more like a red-brown color. 19:47, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

You are looking at the right one, right? This hasn't been showing, and I just want to make sure 19:49, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Emphasize the shading a bit more, and spread out the highlights. Looks good! 20:26, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, this is much better. Other from what Atelda says, I can find nothing wrong. Excellent job! 21:32, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Rainy, this is a sickly red color, not dark ginger. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:16, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

I went back to square one. On the one that says color test, please lok at it and see if the color looks satisfying. It's much easier to recolor my image when it's not blurred or smudged. I will take care of everything else once the color is satisfactory. 23:45, August 13, 2011 (UTC)

That one looks better, just make it a little bit more ginger. :3 00:00, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Check the color now, it should be the second one, it's a little lighter than the others surrounding it 00:44, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Personaly, I liked the one you had up before, but I geuss the 2nd one is okay, just make the stripes on it a little less brown, and a bit more red-ginger, alright? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 03:14, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I liked it too, but a few people thought I needed to change it. I'll fix that and go ahead and add shading and stuff 03:28, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I rather like the color 21:07, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the white paw. 22:22, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the tail stripes match the rest of the stripes? <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:58, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's all based off a realistic marbled pattern. I mean, I can. 23:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and tore her ear, as well, since I forgot to do that 02:26, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

The torn ear looks too round, make it more triangular. 21:39, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:36, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste inside her torn ear, get rid of that, and it should be ready, this is really pretty^^ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:38, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:43, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading in between her shoulder and haunch. 13:38, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 14:33, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even out the shading on the flank. This is looking really nice! <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 17:36, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Jay's Wing (TB) ~ Tweaked (Redone)
...I don't think that I and gray cats mix well.... I ended up re-doing this because I could hardly pick out where the stripes even were. Took the colors from his SC charart and tried to copy the stripes... Original artist was Bluestar1776. Don't think the changes are showing up yet. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:16, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Could you define the shading more, it looks a bit flat. Nice work :D 02:28, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste coming out if his back leg. 00:34, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Again, I don't think that changes are showing. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 02:19, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes so they match his sharpclaw image. 20:46, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes don't seem to have any shading on them. 21:47, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes still aren't showing up... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:48, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur (W) - Redone
Finally nabbed a spot. Changes aren't showing though. Original artist was Icethroat, and I just had to blur the shading, but ended up redoing it. 00:27, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, it looks a bit flat, blur the shading on the chest, and blur the gray paws and white tail tip. This looks nice. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:29, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

This isn't my redone version, it's just the original version. The changes aren't showing. :P 00:33, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

The redone version is just below the current version in the file history. 00:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I know, that's what I was looking at. <font color="#f7d86d">♌<font color="#475982">The Star that cannot Return <font color="#475982"> to the Heavens <font color="#f7d86d">♌ 00:38, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

If I'm seeing the right one, smudge the highlights into the pelt a little 00:51, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Scarletwind: Oh xD. Ivystripe: This is the original. 00:59, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 01:05, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the paws a little more, and blur the end of the shading on the muzzle, and I think there is blured lineart on the tail. 02:24, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 21:51, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes aren't showing. 22:07, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Willlowpelt (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Changes aren't showing but...shading needed to be blurred. Original artist is Icethroat. 03:27, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:59, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing, but darkened. 00:39, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, define the shading on the tail. 21:53, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her a little, she looks white. 21:58, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done :D Changes aren't showing. 22:48, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (W) ~ Tweaked


The Original artist was Insaneulr, I just added the white patches, changes aren't showing yet. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:39, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

I can't see it full size, even on the history, but from where you uploaded it, I can see the white patch needs to be blurred into her pelt more 15:41, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - Blurred the white patches to a max, And the changes look likt they are showing now. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 15:47, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white paw closest to us against the fur a bit more. 00:46, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

....What? I'm sorry, I'm dislexc, and I really don't understand...explain, my brain doesn't understand...nor do I.... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:52, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Whoops, that didn't make sense to me either xD Just smudge the white paw upwards, so it blends in a little more :3 00:56, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

okay, thanks^^  Reuploaded - Smuged the white paw, then blurred, anything else? Changes aren't showing Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 14:43, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur the white on the face. 21:48, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - Blurred her face, and defined her ear-pink, VICTORY!!! CHANGES ARE SHOWING!!!! Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:55, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

And...the victory ends DX Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 00:18, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) ~ Tweaked
I've been waiting awhile to fit this in. So I looked and saw there some spaces still left. Echomist did the regular image, I just added the graying muzzle. 17:42, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Could you dull the muzzle down a little? <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 18:38, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing of course. 21:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)B

blur the top of the muzzle. 22:09, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, this is already approved. :) 22:12, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Ki) - Tweaked
Original artist was Quietstep, and the pelt and earpink were inconsistent with the others. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 19:04, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head (I'm looking at the redone version). 19:25, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:07, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 22:13, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- changes aren't showing. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:49, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (W) - Tweaked
Original artist was Spottedwing and then it was tweaked by Bramble. His shading and highlights needed fixing so I just redid them. xP Oh and the changes arent showing, of course. 20:21, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

There appears to be waste in front of his face and tail, but I don't know if I'm the only one who noticed it or not 03:39, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. ''' 14:03, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading on the chest could be blurred a little more. It kind of sticks out. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:33, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Are you looking at the newer one in his file history? I think the shading looks fine on that one. 18:07, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the head, and darken the shading on the tail. 21:52, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

(To Rainy) Guess I wasn't. Sorry, Rainy. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 00:06, August 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Poppyfrost (Q)~ Tweaked
Original artist was Icethroat. I blurred the shading, fixed the nose colour, and when i was adding dapples i kinda ruined the patches, so i blurred/smudged them and i know it doesnt match the other images, but they're already on the to be tweaked list. Comments? 20:35, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Changes arent showing. 20:37, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:04, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on the tail. Shadewing  Mischief Managed... 15:30, August 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded- 19:41, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the patch on the head a bit to match her other patches. 22:05, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt.R) ~ Tweaked
Needed torn ears, and original artist is BeautifulOblivion. Changes aren't showing. 21:11, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lines on his torn ears a little 21:19, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 21:22, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Deepen the front torn ear a bit. 22:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, its passed 24 hours. :D 22:10, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ruby (Ki) ~ Tweaked
Fixed shading and original artist is Bramble. Changes aren't showing. 21:11, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Its good, i've cirlced the areas that need improvement.

mint-green: Lineart overlaps with color

Red: Highlights?

Teal: Shadows that need lengthening

Blue: Lighten it a tad.

I hope this helps. 20:16, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, just checking, you are looking at the second one down. 20:30, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the tail. 22:14, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

There's waste beside her head, under her hind paw and above her tail. 22:41, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, it should still be the second one down on that link up there^. :) 00:34, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Brick (Ro) - Redone
Mehh, smudging's a bit messy. xD I wanted to smudge, wee. Anyways, original artist was Bramble, and it needed stripes. Wooo.. I remembered this time. xD 21:53, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, darken the nose, define the tail stripes. 21:19, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Rosetail (K) ~ Tweaked


The original artist was Flamingomom3, I made her more ginger and made her tail more pinkish-ginger, I took all colors from her Apperentice image, Changes aren't showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:11, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Bllur the chest highlight. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:02, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

 Reuploaded - Blurred chest highlight, anything else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:13, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

chenges still aren't showing Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 23:13, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink, and it seems you forgot the tail when recoloring O.o. Looks good. 00:23, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Nope, changes aren't showing yet. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:28, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Look at the history, should be the second one. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 00:29, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I did. Well, in any case, her tail looks a bit pinker than the rest of her, and add stripes to the tail too. 00:35, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I took all colors for her Apperentice image, And her apperentice image and warrior image doesn't have stripes on the tail, I have to make the kit image match the other images. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:02, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

This looks a bit too pink. 18:52, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

The one I have, or the image you see? 'Cause the thinkg won't show ANY changes, did you check the histoy? I took all colors from her Apperentice image(<Getting REALLY tired of saying that.) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 18:57, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. 20:22, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded -Blurred her chest highlight, chenges aren't showing. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:06, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink too. 21:23, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

UGH...I redden the ear-pink and now you can't see it DX what else? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 22:58, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (D) - Redone
Original artist was Nightshine, and it needed to be dark ginger, not brown. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:02, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

This doesnt need to be redone. Just colourized. 23:15, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't know how to, Iceheart, that's why I redid it. But I fixed it. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:56, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Needs to be reuploaded over the old deputy image as Rowanclaw.deputy.png, no space. 00:30, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:14, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, but I think he needs to be a bit more dark ginger. He looks a bit too gold. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 15:33, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I thought dark ginger would be something like Redstar's picture... 18:31, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Changes aren't showing. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:48, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) - Tweaked
Original artist was Mousetalon. Earpink needed to be consistent, and she needed darker shading. 02:58, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I've put the image into Photoshop and circled problems:

Green is where the thing that is circled with green (shading/highlights) needs to be blurred. Orange circle is lighten up shading a tad. And blue circles are where the lineart has become pale and you need to make it black again.- Kittycat79 <sup style="font-family;Arial;colour:teal">Kitties Rule! 09:01, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back and tail. The shading doesn't need to be lightened. And blur the earpink. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:06, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  15:53, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the middle shading, darken the tail shading, and blur the earpink more. 18:28, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:04, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the back. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:47, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I did, are you seeing the right one? 16:53, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudy Sun (E) ~ Tweaked (Redone)
Original artist was Sandy. I ended up re-doing the charart so the colors matches her SC charart. Changes aren't showing yet. Comments? <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 04:50, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 18:23, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe make the graying muzzle slightly lighter or oranger to make it more natural looking. --Frosted Apple 19:29, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes still aren't showing up... <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 00:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Darken ze shadin'. :3 15:19, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font color="#8f281a">Scarlet <font color="#9c3f32">wind <font color="#4791ca">Fairy <font color="#70aede"> Tail Mage 17:44, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Bouncefire (A) - Tweaked (Redone)
Original artist was Bramble and he needed stripes. I had to redo him so he would match his warrior image. 18:05, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Try uploading it again, so the changes show in the file history. 18:21, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 18:23, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlighted part (the non-shaded part) a bit. 20:07, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ashfur (SC) (E) - Redone
Original artist was Sandy, and I just had to thicken and blur the shading but ended up redoing the shading. Comments? And changes won't show. 18:06, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad 18:08, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:15, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shadin on the tail and the back and the haunch...everything except the front leg needs blurring. 18:19, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, ignore that. I was looking at the wrong file. Darken the shading. 18:33, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:01, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlighting ot the tail, and make the earpink less purplish. 19:43, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 20:04, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sasha (Ro) - Redone
Original artist was Shimmersong, and I just had to make her a darker shade of tawny (but yet again, I redid it). Comments? I dunno if changes are showing. 18:10, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice, blur the highlights. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 18:14, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 18:17, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink go back 18:18, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:21, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink and blur it. 19:23, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

I already did. 20:01, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

This looks brown. Make it look like Birchfall's alternate warrior. And the earpink is not centered. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:45, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The earpink was already centered o_o. 15:17, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (L) - Tweaked
Original artist was both Yai-Girl and Shimmerpool. His patches needed to blend into his pelt better and his shading needed defined. I think I still need to try bleding his patches more. I had to redo it in some places. 18:48, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I found some mistakes just by looking at it. Silly me 19:00, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear. 19:21, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded  20:59, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. <span style="color:purple;font-family:Comic Sans MS;background:red;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded that's as much as I can do with the earpink 14:52, August 16, 2011 (UTC)