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Graystripe (KP) ~ Tweaked
Needed teh floof. Most recent OA is Skye. Comments? 03:12, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, this could be me but, can you possibly make the floof more like his Warriors and Apprentices? Just doesn't match the style to me. -- 16:49, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well, I tried. I won't make it match tuft for tuft, because it's at a different angle. x.x 23:30, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is ragged; not shaggy. I would suggest looking at the apprentice image; add floof to the neck...maybe make is look somewhat like a mane? 23:34, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I might add a bit more floof to it... 07:44, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

This looks great! I suggest adding maybe a bit more floof around his tail base/tail though. -- 06:00, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:09, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Try...Making the floof more fluffy and shaggy. It looks spikey now. :S 18:36, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Dazzly? o3o 09:59, 14, 06, 2012

Uhm...withdrawing. ^^; *is no good at floofs* 10:12, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can I take over? :3 16:54, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. ^^ 05:45, 15, 06, 2012

Add a little more floof on the haunch. 22:35, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, Silver only just took over and hasn't uploaded yet. Please don't comment if she still hasn't uploaded... 05:02, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ohmaigawsh I killed it ;3;. 23:33, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Add more floof, or define it. =3 23:43, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added a few, and defined a few too. 23:05, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the lineart on the haunch and back a bit smoother. It's a bit, for lack of better word (not meant as an insult) messy in those spots. 05:20, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded No offense taken. 17:30, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the shaggy lineart on the haunches to two pixels. And the colored part of (our left) haunch looks like it has darker pixels towards the top, try smudging over it with the original color or try color picking from the original color and going over that part. 21:43 Mon Jun 18 Reuploaded Sorry if it doesn't look thick enough, pixlr only has odd numbers for brush sizes. If it doesn't look thick enough, it'll be fixed. 11:52, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it still needs to be thickened. Could you also add more "fur" within the shagginess (dunno how to explain >.<), like add more lines of fur on the attached lines of fur. xD 08:13, 20, 06, 2012

Reuploaded 16:50, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the haunch facing away from us to two pixels. 21:51 Wed Jun 20

Reuploaded 23:35, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you thin out the lineart in some places? It looks too thick now xP Skt Spoilers... 13:06, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 13:18, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur on the back puff out more. 09:32, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Redtail (A) - Tweaked
Dat flufffff<33333 OA was Iceheart and I fluff-i-fied his tail. Changes don't seem to be showing - look here Comments? C: 02:47, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some of the tail lineart, mostly near the top. ouo 11:40, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Near the top of the tail looks like some miscolored pixels. Can you fix those? 19:41, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur stick out more like the other images, rather then curve a bit. It should basically stand on end, like he got electrocuted or something. 22:50, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not good at tail tweaking... o3o Withdrawn. 22:59, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. 99.58.201.247 23:43, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
 * That was me. o.e  23:52, June 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the fur at the base of the tail stick out more. 23:02, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Wild, please don't critique the charart if the user taking over hasn't uploaded yet. 05:40, 16, 06, 2012

Reuploaded I tried :P  02:35, June 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make it more....poofy, for want of a better word. Skt Spoilers... 00:12, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Widen the tail a bit. =P 00:55, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little white pixel on the tail. Kinda towards the base, on the top.... *fails at describing where* 05:24, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

That's supposed to be there, dear. Zoom in and you'll see it's the space between to pieces of fluff. 00:48, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? .-. 06:11, 22, 06, 2012

Sorry, didn't have enough time because of school... But now that I'm free, I'll upload it later tonight. 13:35, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Didn't like the old one, so I did it again. :P  01:52, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the end of his tail a bit pointier? It looks like the tip got cut off XD 04:52 Sat Jun 23

Rockshade (Ki) - Tweaked
Redid the shading. I still feel like it needs to be blurred though. e.e The latest OA was Cinder. Comments? 08:21, 20, 06, 2012

Lighten it just a tad, since I can't see the lineart and can you define the earpink? 20:09, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  06:45, 22, 06, 2012

Extend the chest highlight more to the left (our left) so that it lines up with the facial highlight better. 05:52 Sat Jun 23

Reuploaded -  I actually made the face highlight go more inline with the chest one... xD 07:46, 23, 06, 2012

Rosetail (E) ~ Tweaked
Added teh stripes to the tail~Comments? 11:08, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the stripes? They make the tail look purple. Skt Spoilers... 12:51, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) - Tweaked
OA was Wildfire and he needed to be shaggy. I know, it doesn't match exactly to his other images but cat's shaggy fur can look different depending on the situation, and I think it looks cool. However, I can change it if I absolutely must. 15:27, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

This looks Really good, But I suggest maybe adding some more fur around the tail, and maybe his shoulder? Just my opinion. -- 09:27, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Dawn River (SC) - Tweaked
OA was Ashshadow and she needed her shading defined and demensionalized and her markings needed to look less like a texture (btw I actually found the exact texture in GIMP). If you want, I could add a few patches but that would require the tweaking of her queen, too, so I'd rather not. 16:02, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make her shading a bit less red? 23:33 Wed Jun 20

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular so that it looks more natural. 01:16, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine.

While this is up, it needs another color added to it. Whether it be white on the chest or something, or another shade of brown/ginger on the pelt, it needs one more to be a real tortie. A tortie is 3 colors, this is only 2. 03:32, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, If its okay I'm suggesting this, since this is up, maybe add some depth to the eyes? -- 09:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

And if possible, make the shading less..orange? Skt Spoilers... 12:16, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Someone's already said that Sky :/ I'll get it  15:00, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Mossyfoot (W) ~ Redone
Redone for overblurrredness, shading, and pattern in general. OA was me. I'm not very happy with it still but oh well  Skt Spoilers... 00:52, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the brown patches so they're not so hard-edged. 00:56, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt Spoilers... 01:03, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Oooh gorgeous. Any chance of you getting rid of the white patch on the head though? It seems.... out of place. Don't have to, just my opinion. 11:21, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'd really rather not, cause I based most of it off a real cat. But if others agree, I shall. Skt Spoilers... 13:05, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Changed my mind...I'll get rid of it when I can. Skt Spoilers... 15:38, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 01:57, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (KP) - Redone
Dark muzzle, paws, and stripes needed to be removed, and she needed to be more tawny. I looked it up and this is the color of most tawny cats, so I'd rather not change it much. And I can't get the earpink any better than this, so if you want me to change it, give me a color sample. Most recent OA was Leafstrike. Comments? 10:56, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and neck shading a tad. By Sithis she's sexy  <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... ,

...Why's her collar skinnier? 20:50, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think the collar's fine like that, actually. There's really nothing wrong with it...

Sorry, but lineart is lineart. It can't just be changed unless "unusually skinny collar" is part of her description or something. Change it back? Please don't start an argument... 22:48, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

It's skinny cause it was skinny in the manga. It's been like that for a long time and I don't intend to change it. Plus, she only had the collar for a very short period of time, it wouldn't be added to her description anyways. Description is for current things. As for Skt's comment, I'll get right on that. 00:23, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 09:37, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, I thought she didn't even have a collar anymore anyway? <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 13:55, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Skt, she had a collar while she was a kittypet. XD By the time she removed it, her owners had already left, therefore making her not a kittypet anymore. 23:19, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

No I meant she's got a new owner (more or less) and she wouldn't have that particular collar anymore, or if she even has one anymore. owo <font face="Arial" size="1" color="Blue" >Skt Spoilers... 00:07, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Err.... I don't know. I just assumed this image was for when we saw her as a kittypet in the TS series. 03:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

It was, actually. We found out after this image was made that she ended up going to new Twolegs.

Mossyfoot (A) ~ Redone
Needed to be redone to match the warrior. About the fur texture...those are kinda difficult for me in both photoshop elements and pixlr. But I'll try to make it work to help imporve. Recent OA was some people named... eye of silver? I don't know. (Don't know why the photo is cut off on here, but it's supposed to be a full pic.) 13:10, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try and get the fur texture to match? Maybe ask Skt how she did it? 22:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh that was fun. 23:59, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you try to get the texture to flow with how her body is curved more? Like, in the general direction of her fur? owo 00:18, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Rosetail (A) ~ Tweaked
Added stripes to her tail. Comments? 19:25, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. 22:36, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And this is what happens when you forget to save the xcf. file -_-  01:54, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you smudge the pelt into the earpink a little more? c: 05:54 Sat Jun 23

Teller of the Pointed Stones (Ancient) (H) ~ Tweaked
I swear this is tweaked xD Needed it's shading defined, I also changed the eyes to make them darker. OA was Mossy. Comments? 01:59 Fri Jun 22

Lighten and blur the shading. 02:02, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes might not be showing. 02:46 Fri Jun 22

Can you blur her facial and chest shading a smidge more? 00:19, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried but this is as blurred as I can get it now. 04:49 Sat Jun 23

Dapplenose (E) - Redone
Redone to match other images. Comments? 02:09, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink more triangular? It kinda looks like a circle blur. 13:17, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 23:48, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a little more. 00:20, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 01:11, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ki) - Redone
Redone for same reasons as the kittypet. Everything matches the kittypet, from colors, to opacity of shading, so I'm not changing any of that. OA was Rowanflight. Comments? 09:36, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Stormfur (Lo) - Tweaked
Tweaked to be darker. OA was me 01:17, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? 01:56, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:22, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a tiny bit? x3 <span style="">02:53, 23, 06, 2012

Re-uploaded 04:01, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Cloud with Storm in Belly - Tweaked
Finally, no more irky shading. 8D Shading needed definition, OA's were Squirrelflame and mai. :3 Comments? <span style="">02:48, 23, 06, 2012

Lighten the base pelt just a tad. The alt's supposed to be pale gray. Also, blur the back shading.

Reuploaded -  <span style="">03:06, 23, 06, 2012

Cherrypaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Rainwillow I think with a tweak by me. I made her long haired. Comments? 04:29 Sat Jun 23

Berrynose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
OA was me, and all I did was add another layer of shading.

Can you lighten those highlights? 12:08, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

There aren't any highlights. It's fine.

Sasha (Ro) ~ Redone
OA was DJ, and it needed to match the kittypet. Again, all colors come from the kitypet/loner image, so please don't ask me to change them.