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Featherstorm (Q) ~ Tweaked
Well, even though it's listed as a redo, all I really did was slap on some more shading. I'll do a total redo if needed, but...*shrugs*. 09:56, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I think a total redo would be good, so long as you keep the same style. The shading's pretty blotchy. 13:57, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made some adjustments, but the pattern's the same for the most part. 22:06, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Can you blur the stomach shading? 22:08, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that haunch shading. Skt Like a baws  22:13, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:15, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading. o3o 01:35, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 23:12, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the belly "highlight" and/or blur the shading. It looks a bit flat. 15:28, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ew highlights. x.x 22:47, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the belly. Breeze whisker  01:51, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 22:13, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly a little more. 16:24 Sat Jun 2

Lichenfur (E) ~ Tweaked
Needed an under bite =3 Comments? 12:59, May 28, 2012 (UTC) Forgot to fix the jaw.. I'll fix that soon. 15:06, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe give the tooth some shading (for lack of a better word) by darkening the two bottom pixels on the tooth? ^^;; 15:36, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

That's not really an underbite. Her lower jaw should be sticking out, like her loner. 00:10, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know, that's why I said I would fix the jaw up there o3o I failed Dx  21:39, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Her chin looks a little flat, could you curve it? 23:06, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Move the tooth forward. Cuspids aren't that far back in the mouth. Breeze whisker  01:49, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the leg shading a little bit. 23:12, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Curved the chin and moved the tooth forward a bit. Blurred the shading on the leg a bit, but was it the right leg? 14:22, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

The mouth line looks kinda flat. Can you curve the lower lip up so that it goes over the original mouth? 16:26 Sat Jun 2

Shellheart (D) ~ Redone
Shellheart! I wish he didn't die a slow death. D8 Anyways, it needed to be redone due to shading issues and needed to match his deputy a bit more. Comments for improvement? 00:58, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on his bottom a bit more? Breeze whisker  01:48, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

This is too dark  03:23, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink match the elder. 06:07, 31, 05, 2012

Reuploaded. 16:28, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Runningbrook (a) - Redone
Check the talk page for discussion. Ew this image, can't match Icey's epicness. Comments. -.- 07:08, 30, 05, 2012

Blur one of the stripes near the tail a bit. It seems a little bit sharp. 11:31, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Looks good! Maybe add a few small stripes here and there? -- 16:45, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a bit. 04:42, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  06:58, 03, 06, 2012

Barley (Ki) - Redone
See the tweak nomination page for reasons caaaause.... I'm lazy. XD OA was Mistystar. All colors are from his loner (I have the layers still) so no changing that. Comments? 14:17, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and erase some from his face. Breeze whisker  16:05, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 16:25, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on the white is too dark and all the shading needs blurred more  16:57, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded 19:15, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading a bit. Skt Like a baws  09:48, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading too. (Chest meaning the part above the legs. XD 20:58, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Rain (Alt. E) ~ Tweaked
Tweaked for shading issues. 20:50, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'highlights' on the haunch more. 21:38, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh shading a bit :3 21:53, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you enlarge/define/blur the earpink? ^^  00:35, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

I was planning on adding the missing eye to this side of the face. If you're waiting on me, I apologize, if not, then do you think you could? :3  00:44, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^', I hope the eye looks okay. 16:29, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and there's waste everywhere. 16:38 Sat Jun 2

Re-Ups^ Not sure about changes... 16:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'm being OCD today XD there's a tiny bit if waste above the rump. 16:54 Sat Jun 2

XDDD Re-Ups^ 16:59, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Try making the inside of the eye more dark brown-red, and possibly add some scarring around the eye? Skt Like a baws  01:23, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderfur (D) ~ Tweaked
Needed to be darker. OA was Shaf Girl with a tweak by Cloudy, then another by Leaf-storm. Needed to be darker. Comments? 11:04, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten him up a bit. Skt Like a baws  12:34, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make his earpink match the elder's more and make it bigger. 19:39, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 05:28, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. 13:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oakfur (A) ~ Tweaked


He needed to be darker. OA was Nightfall101, then was redone in the new blanks by Sweetflower. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 19:34, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

The shade of brown still doesn't match his warrior.

The base color or the whole thing? Because his warrior image was nominated to be tweaked as well, Skye. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 21:43, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the red (make him more brown) and he should be darker. 23:43, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I know, Loon, working on it. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:45, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried my best to get rid of the red tint....Don't know how well that worked, might be becuase I made him darker... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:51, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more. 15:07, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

He still looks red. Almost russet right now, in fact. Desaturate him. 15:14, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Yay~ He looks brown now~ Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 16:14, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Colorpick from his warrior...this color is absolutely nothing like it. 19:58, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make his eyes more amber. 22:50, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:43, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Snaketooth (W) - Redone
Sorry for not putting this up earlier! Original artist was Mousetalon, and the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? 20:05, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Oh gawd this is wonderful. <3 Define the shading. *steals* ;3 05:03, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (D) - Tweaked
Tweaked the shading, as it was blotchy. OA was Bramble and a tweak by Leaf-storm. Comments? 07:53, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:14, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to remove the shading at the base of the tail and put some more on the end? It doesn't really make sense to me. Skt Like a baws  22:41, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded :3 07:13, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rain That Rattles on Stones (E) - Redone
OA was Nightfall101. He had some shading and pattern issues, and he also needed a missing eye, like his description denotes. Also, just for you guys, this has all new shading <3 (it's more like I couldn't find any of my past chararts that was a short haired elder) I tried out some ghost markings on him, but they're a little dark to be ghost now that I look at them XD  14:47, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Fantastic! He looks a little mottled right now though, maybe make the stripes (?) on his body lighter/less visible. 15:15, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

-headdesk- Just ignore me. I didn't even look at his description... He looks great! ^^; 15:19, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

It's so beautiful I love him <333333 Can you maybe define the earpink a little more and blur the white muzzle a tiny bit? 15:50 Sat Jun 2

Tis is beautiful<33 Can you darken the mottles a tiny bit? 15:52, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmmm...maybe darken the shading a tad and blur it? 8D Skt Like a baws  22:39, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten some shading on his chest? Breeze whisker  03:21, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ Tweaked
Added the underbite. OA was Stone. Comments? 18:20 Sat Jun 2

Brokenstar (Ro) - Tweaked
He needed torn ears and scars. OA was Hawktalon with a redo by Mistystar and another by Scarlet. 00:14, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, you don't have to do this, but since he was described with all this messy fur, maybe make it so that it looks like there's some stray clumps of fur covering part of the scars? Breeze whisker  03:20, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Talon (E) - Redo
- Shading and stripes need to be redone. Original artist is me. 00:23, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't his description say he has ragged fur? Pay no attention to this comment if it is uncited This is puurdy <33 02:57, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

It's been cited, Berry. That entire description, apart from the "old" part is all from Moonrise. 'Teldy already knows about it.

Reuploaded. =P 03:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (Ki) - tweak
- because the muzzle is darker and looks gray rather than lighter ginger. 00:32, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around his head. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 01:34, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 03:29, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blackclaw (W) ~ Tweaked
Tore the ear, and the OA of the current version is me. Please don't ask me to fix anything else, as I just recently re-did this, and it's fine.

Blackclaw (E) ~ Tweaked
Tore the ear, fixed the shading, and the OA of the current version is me.

It could just be me, but the ear looks tufted, not torn. 01:58, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

It's torn. However, since the back ear's so small, you can't really tell...

Make the tear just a little deeper. Looks great. :3 09:28, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt. 2 W) ~ Tweaked
I added the floof and I tweaked the shading (someone was going to comment about it). OA was Mistystar. Comments? 00:48 Sun Jun 3

Define the earpink just a tiny bit. Look's beautiful, well done <33 02:58, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is fine.