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Raggedpelt (W) - For Approval
This is my first try at doing a charart, so I'm sorry if it's really bad/if I did it wrong. How is it?Hollytail 00:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, first; the lineart is really strange, it's white, it should be black. Send, you need to save it in png format, not jpg. Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

How do I fix the lineart? And could that have anything to do with the fact that I had issues with getting the blank onto pixlr?Hollytail 01:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did you delete the white inside the blank before you put the brown in? And what kind of trouble did you have? Min now  claw My dragon will eat you! 01:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Right-click->open in new tab for the image, and then you can edit it. The images in the gallery are shrunken a bit. -- Gοlδεnpαω A p p a r e ! 01:25, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Over the area with the blanks it says to click to get the image at full size, but whenever I tried that, it wouldn't let me place it in pixlr, or save it to pictures. It came up in a box in the center of the screen and all that it would let me do was highlight it...Eventually I just used the thumbnail picture...Hollytail 01:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, you can't do that. Copy the file name of the blank and place it into the search bar. Then, go to the page and get the location, and you're good to go! Other than that, the image looks nothing like  Møųş  ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  01:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I tried fixing it in the right blank this time... How does it look now?Hollytail 02:30, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Use the color dropper to get the right coat color- he is still far too dark. And his stripes don't match the leader image. Don't worry, that problem is easy to fix. Møųş ëţą  łő  ŉ!!  04:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Or use the sponge tool set to saturate on size 200 will do. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail 12:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is still weird...Layer a regular warrior blank on the image. The shading needs more blurring and so does the stripes. And, the ear pink needs to be lighter. Ice Spring is here! 15:45, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Tried fixing it, but what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 16:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Why did you blur the ragged fur lines? Those should be solid! ☮Quail☮ Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 15:36, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, sorry... is this better? And what is layering?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:51, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

The eye doesn't look right...look at this or this to see how it should look.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:33, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is really blurred and there is some missing on the head and paws. Also darken and blur the shading. Add another stripe to the haunch and try making it more brown like his leader image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:39, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I can say this but; it's been 5 days since you've worked on this. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  17:50, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

You can say it but this user still has time as we wait a week. Sakura Kiss Haikage 17:54, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Eek, Sorry! I worked on it, but I didn't realize that I didn't re-upload it. Oops... Sorry! Anyway, better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The line art still needs to be fixed and his pelt should be a darker. Sakura Kiss Haikage 21:55, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

What's wrong with the line art and how do I fix it?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:39, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the picture! LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:04, April 14, 2010 (UTC) The lineart near his back ear is missing where it connects with his head. The lineart near his hind leg and tail are smudged too. you can see brown pixels. Just past a new lineart on top of it and clean it up some if there's extra sitting outside of it.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  01:45, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I would highly reccomend redoing this. LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 04:22, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I could try to fix the lineart for you if you'd like. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my Love 19:58, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to redo it, how does it look now?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 00:32, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

The lineatr is good but im not sure what the dark brown smudges in his pelt are. Is it supposed to be shading? Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:42, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think they are. Blur the shading, lengthen the stripes and make them less dark like the leader image, and make the ear pink more triangular. Rain whisker  武士貓  00:14, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

The large blob of shading in the middle of his haunch needs to go away. Perhaps you might want to check one of the tutorials? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   17:27, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes and blur the shading. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 17:32, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to fix it, how does it look now?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to lengthen the stripes. 雨 晶須  15:27, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC) The colour is a little dark and there are more stripes needed in places. The ear pink is a little bright and/or needs blurring and the raggedy-fur lines look too... similar; as in they are all the same shape and size as each other. ✐Sa NdY  17:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also, he needs a torn ear (unless he got that after he became deputy?) 雨  晶須  21:20, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 01:24, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

He looks more dark ginger than brown now. Blur the stripes some. Sakura Kiss Maybe you're my love 19:35, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is right. What you need to do is save his leader or deputy pic and use the eyedropper tool to get the right color because it looks like your having trouble with the color. Also, the tip of the ear facing us is gray. Erase that.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:42, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:54, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah,just blur the ear pink a little more. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:00, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:59, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be blurred more, I don't see any shading or highlights, and the haunch seems empty. Add stripes on the haunch. Quailflight 06:53, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:28, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is really bright. Make it softer, like his leader image. <font color="#99badd">Cool Blue Reason: <font color="#191970">Wrapped Around Your Throat  22:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see much shading at all, but maybe thats just me... And I agree, soften the ear pink a bit. -- Quiet !...  03:08, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:20, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 03:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more of a reddish color and blur it. Also, the nick in the ear doesn't seen realistic. I can fix it for you if you like or just ....... er it's hard to explain I would say maybe thicken the lineart around the nick? What do others say?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:57, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if the nick looks any better, but I tried to fix it. Anyways, better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few small stripes to the top of his head. BLur the earpink as well. Quailflight 08:20, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Tempus Sans ITC" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what program you're using, but you need to take the burn tool (looks like a hand) and run it over the back, chest, tail, and head. That will add some good shading. You also need to blur the ear pink quite a bit and the also the stripes. -- Bram ble  03:38, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:30, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be triangular.  Snickers  19:41, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 21:09, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:23, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I feel really bad that my rubbishy Raggedstar image is so hard to copy... I thought I'd give you a few tips about how I made the leader image which may help you get the colours and shading right. I paint-bucketed the main colour and then used the burn tool to add shading - with a size 15 brush - and then used the burn tool again (both times on midtones) to paint the stripes on with a size 5 brush and blurred. I think the problem you have is not that the stripes are too light, but rather that they are the wrong colour.

Also, the raggedy-fur look needs to be more raggedy. You need to rough it up a bit and make it a little less regular; at the moment yours are all very straight v-shapes, try and vary it a little and make it more sruffy! =) Hope this helps. ✐Sa  NdY  19:15, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail מרגלית Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Rename the image Raggedstar.warrior.png -<font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 22:54, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

O.K, I'm not sure I did that right, because now it's saying that this is a duplicate of the Raggedpelt (W), but it's been named Raggedpelt.warrior.png.<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:22, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes thinner and add more along the body, head and tail. Darken the shading a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:09, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is a white pixel on the chest. Snow storm  23:57, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 22:59, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

darken the shading some and add some to the legs farthest from us. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:46, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 02:26, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes need to be thinner, and the lineart for his ragged fur needs to be thicker  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:28, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:26, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

He's too dark. Dark hallows 01:45, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 17:29, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Darken/add face stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   06:11, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:43, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

The little v thats makes the pelt ruffled is quite messed up. Something is just wrong about it. Also, the ear is a little dull and mishapen. FrostHeart 02:41, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Could you please explain that?because saying that there's something "just wrong about it" doesn't exactly tell me what's wrong, so I don't know how to fix it. Also, what part of the ear is dull and mishapen? What do you mean by that?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 23:38, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hollytail is right Frostheart; you really need to be more clear when you comment on someone's image. Hollytail, the ear pink could be straightened out a bit more  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:45, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Better?<font color="#00FF00" face="Handwriting-Dakota" style="background:black">Hollytail Lion x Heather 4ever! 20:25, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC)-For Approval
Here she is! Second sharpclaw! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, why am I so slow!? I really want to put my charart up! Image wise, this is good. Just blur the shading and highlights. Also, darken the earpink and make it smaller. But this is good.<span style="font-family:Constantia; background:LightSilver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aqua;">Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 14:06, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Note: I am dping this while Briarlight is being worked on :) Blurred shading and made the Ear Pink darker and smaller. :) Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  15:29, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading... Could you make it more noticeable??? I think you blurred it a little to much... Mo onp  elt   ۞  18:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about that Moonplet. :) I think I got over-excited. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  18:24, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Sakura Kiss Haikage 14:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Largened Ear Pink. Better? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:30, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Center it some more. Sakura Kiss Haikage 19:29, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Centered it. Sorry it took me so long, my laptop wouldn't let me upload it. :3 Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  09:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading more visiable;thefore, darken it. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 14:06, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, darken the shading and/or add some highlights. ✐Sa NdY  17:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:07, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was talking to Sandy and Shruugy on the IRC and they said to show what my shading normaly looks like. Here it is. Dapple star  10:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, that doesn't look too dark to me. It just needs blending. ✐Sa NdY  12:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's horrible though. :( Γǻώή  ςτόŗm  12:45, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are hard to see, and the bottom of the earpink could be blurred. Quailflight 08:18, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have attempted to blur the shdng, but have failed, also I've brightened highlights. Γǻώή ςτόŗm  10:32, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:25, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''I've redone her but it won't let me upload her! I've done everything that has been said but I can't do it!!! Sorry, I'll try A.S.A.P Γǻώή ςτόŗm  08:47, May 8, 2010 (UTC)'''

Reuploaded Finally. I used Insane's way of layering the image and its worked!!! Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:45, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments.....? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  15:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and more triangular. Right now it looks like a circle at the bottom of the ear. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:59, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or she will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:54, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, but the ear is too small. Add highlights to the tail and legs. FrostHeart 02:41, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I have got a ban from the PC for the rest of the week...is there any way this can be frozen or something? Γǻώή ςτόŗm  12:09, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) Up for approval
Well, here he is! Open for comments now. Butterfly } { Song!  13:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The image is a redlink at present. ✐Sa NdY  13:48, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I KNOW. I can't open the file! I'll try again. Please wait Butterfly }  { Song!  14:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Butterfly } { Song!  14:29, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any eye-color. Φτερ όaερ  άκι  14:49, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

In the future, don't use caps, because it's like shouting. I do see the eye color, just that the highlight in the eye seems a bit big. Also, blur the stripes and shading on the tail. -- 雨 晶須  15:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Needs eye colour! :3 Dawnleaf 14:45, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

The eye color is there, but whoever made these blanks made the highlights just as big as the eye color space. And I'm sorry, I won't use caps in the future. Butterfly } { Song!  19:05, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think he had the nick in his ear when he was an apprentice. Clar ris  sa! :)  11:22, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, he might've. Thistleclaw was a pretty tough mentor.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 19:29, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

As for the image, you should use a tutorial or an apprentice pic like Frostfur's for the eyes.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 00:26, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I still think this is good for my third attempt (I think of it as my first because it's the only one that was up for more than one day). I origionally made him with the scars on his muzzle, but painted over them because he got them later. Butterfly } { Song!  01:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

You still haven't put coloring in the eyes. He should have amber. Quailflight 16:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try to copy the eyes from another apprentice image like Shrewpaw. If not, I can do it for you.-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:35, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait. How's this? I changed the eye highlight to the eye color... Butterfly }  { Song!  14:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some eye-white. Bring up an apprentice image on your art program, and zoom ito his/her face. That should help with the eye color, pupil, and eye-white positions  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:50, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see a pupil. Just *a glint of amber eyes* xD Spri  ngs  tar  20:40, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

There is a pupil, and the eye white was preventing everyone from seeing his eye color. Make up your mind please! Butterfly } { Song!  16:09, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

No one said get rid of the eye highlight just change it's placement. Do what Night said look at some of the approved apprentice chatarts and copy the eye from there. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 16:33, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Or look here for how to do the eye. 雨 晶須  21:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedThank you for the Tutorial! I needed that, and I'll use it ffr. Butterfly } { Song!  16:40, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaller. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:52, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:55, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

The lines on the tails look messed up, I think you blurred it too much. Also, the eyes look more yellow than amber to me. I think you should highlight a bit more on the muzzle and the tip of the tail. FrostHeart 02:48, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks fine to me, and the eye is the same color as his other images  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:24, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry I didn't work on this sooner. my computer is being weird, could i have a couple of weeks or so so my parents can fix it? Butterfly } { Song!  00:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds - For Approval
I will say that Moonpelt's version was very good, and I'll remember to put the rank after my charart next time. I guess I didn't think I needed it since Chasing Clouds has only one known rank. Anyways, comments?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh...blur the shading on his gray parts and darken the shading on the white transition. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 15:46, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good....blur the gray. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred some line art on the ear. <span style="color:lime;font-family:Century Gothic;background:black;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 13:51, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add some grey to the face. -- Ice The stars will light your path... 19:39, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart's blurred in several places. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:21, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more gray patches all over-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:27, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading on the gray parts, darken the white shading, fixed the blurred lineart on the ear and some other places, and added gray to the face and other parts.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:14, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks weird. Quailflight 09:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's blurred a lot. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 23:00, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where exactly do you see it blurred? Maybe it's obvious to you, but I can't tell. My computer crashed a few days ago and I have limited time on my brother's computer, so I can't really look over to see exactly where it's blurred.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:52, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Around the head and tail, I think. <font color="#50c878">Raven <font color="#6495ed">flight <font color="#9966cc">92 00:29, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to working on it soon.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:27, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If there are still blurred places, I can fix that. Also, any other problems?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:19, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * The lineart still looks blurred...maybe its this computer as its not my own. Its like fuzzy where it touches the color and it seems almost blurred to the gray patches. Blur the patches more too.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I went over all the fuzzy places and fixed them. Also blurred the patches into the white part a little more.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * The white patches on the tail are very grey and the shading needs thickening and blending all over. ✐Sa  NdY  16:09, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:20, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * The shading on his gray patch on his back needs to be blurred more.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:39, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  23:32, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:41, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add more grey to the back paws and make his ear more noticeable. FrostHeart 02:49, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you mean by "more noticeable." I can't change the lineart.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:21, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (Q)-For Approval
This is one thing............. an epic fail. XP Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 02:32, Apr<font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:27, May 13, 2010 (UTC)il 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 00:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, and add a few to her legs  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:14, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

When I did darken the stripes, it didn't match her warrior image and messed the whole picture up. The stripes on the leg are there, you just can't see them very well because of the shading. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 03:09, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I still think that you should darken the stripes in the shaded area. The shading would darken the stripes. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 19:27, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened leg stripes. Comments?-- Ea rt hsto rm   Keep  the   Earth   clean! 22:15, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Keep blurring the stripes, because it looks like they've only been blurred over once. Here's a trick:

If it looks like it won't blur anymore, press the mouse again and keep repeating until the blurring is perfect. Quailflight 10:49, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes more. Comments? Snow storm  23:01, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes have no highlights- they seem to go over the shading and highlights you put- they look drawn on. Could you fix that? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   20:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I understand what you are saying. Do I have to redo the image? Or is there a way to fix it? Snow storm  20:53, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Well, acually Mouse, that's the way I do my tabbies. I do the shading and highlights first, then I do the stripes  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

A lot of people do that but it only works if you use the burn tool for stripes. You should do the stripes first if you paint them on. As for the image if you're careful you can just highlight that area. Ashshadow Bring me to Life! 13:30, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I used the pencil tool to put the stripes on :3 What should I do? I also did it the way Night did it. Is it ok? Snow storm  18:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading again. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:15, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I never darkened the shading before, and if I do the stripes wont be visible. Snow storm  03:05, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:31, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Snow  storm  23:55, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:27, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I won't blur anymore. Snow storm  16:44, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


 * I blurred it a touch for you (if you don't like it then revert it), but you're right; to do so any more would blur it right into the pelt and it wouldn't be seen. I think you've done a great job with this. -- Sandy star 11:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you, Sandy :3 I thought I would fail because this was my first tabby. Thank you, also, for blurring it. Snow storm

14:37, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

So is this in CBA? Snow storm  01:57, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. Make the earpink a tad bigger and then it'll be ready for sure. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  02:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Highlight the tail. And make the ear more pink. Great job :]FrostHeart 02:50, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is fine.You could make the ear pink a little more noticeable though.Awesome job! =)  S n i c k e r s  7 Days! 19:33, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (A) - For Approval


I don't like Robinwing, so I erased it. I'm at school, so this isn't finished..-- ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  03:06, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

As I believe has been said numerous times before, you never blank a section; you put 'withdrawn' in place of 'for approval' and let one of the senior team archive it. You never erase it. I also uploaded your image in accordance with the new naming policy; Tallpoppy.apprentice. Your image isn't finished yet, so I'll hold my comments for now. -- Bram ble  03:33, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, this looks like a speckled (whatever LOL) cat and here description says tabby, add some color to the eye, add some shading and highlights if you want to, akso some ear pink, and blur the markings after you make them tabby stripes. (sorry if they are tabby stripes : Add stripes to the tail, the foreleg thats farthest away from us, some on thee tail, and some on the back leg closes to us. <font color="#333399">Mo <font color="#3333CC">onp <font color="#333399 ">elt  <font color="#3366FF ">₪   13:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's not done with the image; in her first message it says that she was at school when she did it.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:59, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

School again Reuploaded ≈Ivy -sδmδ≈  03:08, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken her pelt and the shading some. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:02, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

She looks too golden, make her a brown color like her elder and queen images  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:09, May 20, 2010 (UTC)


 * Don't forget to add the ear pink and color in the eyes.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:23, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * She looks too golden, and the tabby stripes seem too weird. And make the ear pink. FrostHeart 02:51, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
 * The ear does have earpink in it, it just is hard to see. S n i c k e r s  7 Days! 19:34, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D) -- For Approval
I'm hiding under my bed, if you need me. But since there are a lot of images in the CBA stage, I think I'm safe. → •Maple  fern•  ←  23:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Great job! The only thing I see is the ear pink and the white/brown transition coFrostHeart 20:20, May 23, 2010 (UTC)uld be blurred some more. 雨 晶須  01:06, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome job, Maple :) Blur the shading and highlights, make the white on his chest stretch up higher, and add a few stripes to his face; in addition to what Blackclaw said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:24, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Again, when I state 35, I mean 35. That doesn't mean put up another when images are in CBA or if they're being declined. It means put it up when there's room. Anyway, the images is good. I don't see anything other than what has already been stated. -- Bram ble  22:42, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Bramble, I shall not do it again. Anyway, it's fixed. → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:54, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, lighten the ear pink, I can barely see it and darken/add shading to the head. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 12:13, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add more shading to the legs, also. And maybe blur the highlights more? Dark hallows 21:16, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred higlights, darkened shading on legs, added shading to head, lightened earpink. → •Maple  fern•  ←  11:37, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? → •Maple  fern•  ←  00:21, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make his eyes a bit paler. Add more stripes to the base of the tail-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the top of the white patch. Dark hallows 01:47, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

The ears too red. The tabby marks near the tail needs to be blurred just a tad bit. Other than that, its really good! :]

Please work on this or it will be declined  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:49, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, but the ear is too red and defined and the tail needs to be highlighted more. FrostHeart 02:52, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (W) - For Approval
I'm withdrawing Rosetail, so this should be ok. Comments? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 20:07, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have torn ears?  Snickers  20:10, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

His other images don't have torn ears, and I don't want to contradict. It'll probably be fixed next tweak week. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 20:13, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading and stripes, and darken the ear pink a tad. -- Hawkshine Partyyyy! 20:16, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! '''20:28, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

There are some stray pixels around his tail.  i nsaneular  The original Hazelnut spread 00:11, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ''' <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 00:24, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

His tail looks odd... the break point doesn't seem right... perhaps thicken it?-- Dark hallows 21:11, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 23:42, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks unnatural. Maybe make the tip bend down a little, you know, sag? Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   00:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 01:06, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better, but the part circled here-looks more sagged than broken. Can you fix that? I'm sorry I didn't give enough detail before. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   14:30, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">βειιϛοʉπɗ <font color="Aqua" style="background:white;"> ding-a-ling! 14:36, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

just lighten the pink a tinsy bit it looks brown &lt;fontcolor="Black"&gt;LionClaw&lt;/font&gt;<font color="Yellow" style="background:red;"> Lionclan's coming!

Reuploaded. Better? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 15:10, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur some more (Love your siggie :)) Quailflight  09:42, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? (thanks!) <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 23:35, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 18:12, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:02, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön''' <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 10:55, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 22:22, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and ear pink some more-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:34, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:18, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I still cannot see the ear pink at all-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:30, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I can see it... It's actually quite clear on my computer. <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:36, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Night. I can see it but barely. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:41, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

What should I do? Darken it some more or something? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 01:54, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:34, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? <font color="Turquoise">Jöhn lënnön <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:white;"> Imagine 23:17, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear is too brown and I think you blurred it too much. FrostHeart 02:53, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see what you're saying. The earpink is pink on my computer. Kaoru  Hitachiin  10:34, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Not only is it pink on my computer as well; it's about the same color as his other images  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:25, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Moss (Q) - For Approval


you like? i do i think its my best yet....constructmentsLionClaw132 03:50, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. Lighten that and make the ear pink smaller. Also darken the shading on the face-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:01, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where did the image go?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I put it back up. I think this is the right image? Dark hallows 16:03, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

yes thank you! my computer is bieng very very STUIPID it wont let me downlaod it! any ways comments?LionClaw132 00:00, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred the lineart on the back. S n icker s     Life's a rollercoaster 20:28, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Also rename the file to Moss.queen.png S n icker s      Life's a rollercoaster 20:29, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

btw i didnt blur the line art the queen image came like that so it cant be helped but i can fix the file LionClaw132 23:37, May 7, 2010 (UTC)&nbs o i nClaw L     Times running out

Lighten the shading. -- Icestorm Peace 19:41, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

And also thicken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:26, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on it or it will be declined. Dark hallows 20:57, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED-k this is the best i could do and Nightshine i dont think thicking it would helpLionClaw132 19:19, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lionclaw, this is not your image. You can't take credit for an image you didnt make. This is Leopardfoot's queen image. It's possible to be banned for a short period for claiming someone elses work. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:25, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, this is Leapordfoot's image. You can be banned if you don't admit that you didn't do it. Next time, do your own characts. FrostHeart 02:56, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Adderfang (D) - For Approval
Hey, guys! Sorry for not contributing to the project lately. =P Our computer broke down a couple months ago, and I've been using my mom's laptop ever since. I thought Pixlr wouldn't really work well on her computer, but I think Adderfang turned out alright. What do you guys think? Oh, and also, I drastically changed his deputy image from his warrior image because I was planning to re-do his warrior image during the next tweak week. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:43, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I'm not sure you can totally re-do another person's image, even for Tweak Week. Mo   us    et    al    on    !!   23:45, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Could someone remind me when he was deputy? I don't remember that; but I guess I could have overlooked it in BP  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

He wasn't. Sunstar's only deputies were Tawnyspots and Bluefur, and Bluestar's deputy was Redtail up until his death. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 01:03, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Huh; where did we get that he was a deputy I wonder? Oh well. Sorry, Honeyfur; is there another cat you can use this as?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:46, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

He was temporary deputy for a while. Kinda like you Night. He filled in while Tawnyspots was sick. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:49, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I was the one who did Adderfang's warrior image, so that was why I was planning to re-do him. Also, when Tawnyspots was sick, Adderfang filled in for him, so he was a temporary deputy. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 10:57, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the chest area. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:41, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? And also, I'm really sorry for causing all this confusion; if Adderfang doesn't work out, I could always choose a different cat. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 20:15, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. This is really good!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:17, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Snowflight! I actually re-located the highlight. Is it blurred enough? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 22:44, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great to me. -- Sandy star 21:28, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bram ble  10:27, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripes and earpink could be blurred more. Quailflight 05:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights can be blured a little more too.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:56, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blur tool is kind of weak, but I tried to make it work. How's this? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:04, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't this look more like his warrior image? The colours on this one are all different and so are the stripes. I prefer the style of his warrior image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   06:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

She said that she wanted to redo his warrior image during tweak week. I dont think that the colors are different but the highlights make them look different. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:55, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I used the exact same coloring for his deputy image; I guess the shading and highlights just make it look different. I personally think his warrior image doesn't look very good, but I can always re-do him. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 23:14, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I personally like this style better. Stripes aside make the earpink a little bigger. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:16, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, Ashshadow! Made the ear pink bigger. And I'm sorry, Nightshine. Is there anything I should do to make his stripes look better? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 18:42, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you can change the spots into stripes. They looks kind of strange at the moment-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   06:23, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Highlight the tail and legs. FrostHeart 02:56, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

No Frostheart, the legs and tail don't need highlighting. I would change the spots into stripes if I were you Honeyfur. Quailflight 09:23, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Voletooth (A)--For Approval


Revised Again! Any comments?Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is my 1st charart and I went off of the tutorial pages. Can you help me make this better? Hawkfur7 04:45, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the paint and blur messed up the lineart and I don't know how to fix it. Suggestions?Hawkfur7 04:57, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Layer over another line art. This is really good for your first charart! The eye colour needs to be fixed-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:00, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Adding to that, the image is a little too red. Copy the colour from his elder image and use that-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:06, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the eyes a lighter shade of green? Is that what you meant? Because I based his eyes off of his warrior picture.Hawkfur7 05:16, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

If I'm making him his elder color, do you want me to make the stripes a darker brown or keep them as is?Hawkfur7 05:25, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Use all the colours from his elder image. For the way the eye should look go here and look under the eye section-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   05:23, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a more natural color. Sil ver paw Chase that mouse!  19:03, May 11, 2010 (UTC)


 * Not bad for a first image :) First thing first, the eyes don't have their line art anymore and most of our images keep their lineart of the eyes. When you re-add the lineart like Nightshine said, you should good to go with that. Make the ear pink the same color as his warrior and elder image. His colors look closer to his warrior image so it seems fine, but of course those don't technically match the color of his elder image as they're lighter. Then there's the highlights on his tail, just burn those a little as they're too bright against the rest of his fur.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:04, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * How about now?Hawkfur7 04:10, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg. Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Convert into a png. This looks like a jpeg. Quailflight 06:15, May 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Converting might not help...and I just noticed that you named the file wrong too. Change it too Voletooth.apprentice.png if I'm correct I believe--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:37, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, the weird thing is, I did save it as a png file, not a jpg. But, I resaved and renamed as a png file, just to be sure. It should be fine now.Hawkfur7 05:41, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * I also made him more of his elder colors, but lighter. And I fixed the lineart on his body and on his eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 05:49, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

He stills looks .jpg...I'm afraid even I have never found a way to undo this. However, I got the reverted version here:

Now I suggest just redoing him with this one, that way you won't have to start from scratch--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:53, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

How do you layer over another line art? Because I'm using Pixlr, and everytime I add a layer, it just deletes the one I was working on.Hawkfur7 06:11, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. I figured it out how to layer over another lineart using GIMP2.Hawkfur7 19:40, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I reuploaded the modified png image you posted, and it's at the top. Better?Hawkfur7 02:16, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hello...? :(Hawkfur7 05:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anyone there?...Hawkfur7 09:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. Blur the ear pink just slightly more, but other than that it looks great! : Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:10, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''At the top. I blurred the ear pink more. Is it good to go?Hawkfur7 21:50, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to ask Bramble, but it looks good to me! Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:55, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye and add stripes to the tail. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:00, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''at the very top. I added stripes to the tail and fixed the eyes a little. How is it now?Hawkfur7 02:09, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. at the very top. I also brightened/darkened him with the burn/dodge tool, just to give him a little more depth.Hawkfur7 05:32, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try using This to see a way to do eyes. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  20:16, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the eyes. How is it now?Hawkfur7 06:51, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made his spine a little darker to add depth and around his haunches. Now, how is it?Hawkfur7 05:30, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The eye still seems off to me. It's too square. Besides that darken the shading on the legs faruthest from us. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:21, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe on his head, and make the shorter stripes longer. Also, highlight the tail and front legs. FrostHeart 02:57, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, the highlights are unessessary. Quailflight 09:25, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Husker (KP) - For Approval
There are six discussions, so this is technically under the limit. Constructments? -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 19:53, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the grey on top of the head just a little more.Hawkfur7 05:44, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 19:27, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the top of his tail a tad bit more then I think it will be ready for approval. Its very very good Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 03:48, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks:) Blurred tail shading. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ          ö        19:30, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more reddish. Just a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:36, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Saturated ear pink. -- Ŧ ∆ ķ მ ♰ § Ʊ ო Σ         ö 19:18, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, just make the ear bigger. FrostHeart 02:58, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, the ear pink doesn't need to be any bigger. Just make the light part on the top of his head a bit lighter  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:14, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W)-For Approval
Well, this is my first charart, and I think it came out pretty well. Any comments? River pelt  23:52, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

That is REALLY GOOD! Try to make his bottom jaw look... strange. Almost like broken, okay? That's how it's supposed to be! But seriously, it looks nice. Shadowstream 11:22, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I made the jaw look as crooked as i could. Riverpelt 18:04, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The line art is really blurred. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:54, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

The jaw needs to look like. And the lineart is really blurred. -- 雨 晶須  22:18, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! '''Reuploaded. '''How's that, or do I need to sharpen the line art a bit more? River pelt  22:29, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes you should. And try expanding the beige on his nect more, and also add sharper edges to the tabby stripes.  Mo us  et  al  on  !!  Here comesSUMMER!  02:24, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

That is awesome! Jut sharpen the tabby a little like Mousetalon said. And try to make his fur an almost red color, like the leader charart. Shadowstream 12:07, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I tried to sharpen the line art more, fixed the beige on his neck, sharpened the tabby markings, and made his fur a red color. Hold on I have to blur the tabby marks more.'''Reuploaded. '''How's this? River pelt  12:54, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

....The whole image looks blurred likes he's just super FUZZY.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:58, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry! I'll redo it completely! River pelt  23:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I redid the entire charart! Is this any better? River pelt  00:10, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

The pink still isn't hitting it....and you have bits and pieces of gray surrounding the image. They possibly came from editing the image and unable to see it as the image is transparent. I uploaded an image to show, but this image isn't transparent so don't try editing it. Just use it as a reference. I also included the ear pink from his deputy image.
 * Much better...now lets begin. The ear pink needs to lighter as its too dark/bright and it doesn't match his deputy image one as you can see above. He's also missing a patch of tan fur on his front forepaw. The tabby stripes need to be blurred tremindously.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 01:00, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks Shimmerpool! Reuploaded. Oops I need to blur the stripes a bit more. Reuploaded. How's this? River  pelt  11:49, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 21:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded. I cleared out the gray spots and made the ear pink the same color as the deputy's ear pink. River pelt  23:07, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, fix the line art on the muzzle, blur the stripes more and lengthen the cream coloured throat-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:51, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... '''Reuploaded. '''I fixed the line art, blurred the stripes, and lengthened the cream-colored throat. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:37, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks as if half his nose was cut off  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Blur the stripes in more. You see how they're supper smoothed in almost like fadded into hsi fur on the deputy image? Also I think some highlights would be nice. Just add them to the same place as his deputy image. :)--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:53, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
 * Reuploaded.  Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:44, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the nose. Anything else? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 18:18, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the pelt a little bit. It seems a bit light. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:19, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''It's a bit darker now. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 23:48, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The nose still doesn't look quite right; the lineart is gray at the tip  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:14, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the nose a bit, and cleared away the gray lineart. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 20:15, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

The muzzle line art looks cut off-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:37, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

What do u mean about the line art being cut off? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 13:43, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think she means that it looks flat. It's more rounded in his other images. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:10, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The beige stripe on his throat is a little to thick at the bottom. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching... 13:23, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Any more comments? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 22:08, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reshape his ear and highlight the tail.

The ear pink looks fine to me, but Frostheart is right about highlighting the tail. Frostheart, always remember to sign after you leave a comment  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:15, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is highlighted, its just a bit dull. Do u mean brighten the highlight on the tail? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:43, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I brightened the highlights on the tail, if that's what you wanted me to do. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:10, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Any more comments? Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:56, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - For Approval
There are 6 discussions, so I dont think this is over the limit. Comments? Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 00:37, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really good Blacktail! Just make the ear pink color more visable. River pelt 00:43, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, River! Reuploaded. Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 00:47, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I added you to the current projects table, Blacktail, as Warriors808. You can add in your current projects there now; you're near the bottom of the table. Just use CTRL + F to find yourself if need be. On the image, nice job, but the ear pink needs to be a hotter and more visible pink; try a little darker and less dull. Also add a white pixel to the eye to give it some life. Bram ble  10:44, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow...This is better than mine. Quailflight 05:29, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   01:26, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, and don't forget the white pixel. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 21:57, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Bramble! I made the ear pink hotter and visible, added a white pixel, and darkened the shading. Blacktail <font color="#008000">Talk! 12:00, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to blur in the shading a bit more. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:11, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The white pixel for the eye is bothering me :\ try moving it to another position.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 22:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the shading well. Blur it more and make the ear more pink FrostHeart 20:17, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome! The only thing that I see needs to be fixed is the shading and the ear pink. Blur the shading some more and also make the ear pink like FrostHeart said, otherwise this is very good! :3 Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 02:31, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) -- for Approval
Hi This Is My Import for Rainfur of SkyClan as a loner. I know it's small, I'll make it bigger soon!Thanks! Sunspirit

Next time, Sunsp

irit, start a new section. I'll wait for the one to come up before commenting. → •Maple  fern•  ←  10:39, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I'm New so I dont Know That Much! :( Sunspirit 21:48, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry. No one is mad at you. Everyone makes mistakes when they're new. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:52, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it. Fix the blurred part by the back ankle.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  21:23, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Erase some of the markings outside the line art. River pelt  00:22, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay.. Is That Better? ( This Is My First :) ever one) Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 05:23, May 16,

2010 (UTC)

You still need to erase some of the blurred gray areas around his body

. Here's a tip, you can't usually see the mistakes in pixlr but before you swap the new image with the original, you can see some of the gray areas around the image. I circled the areas that need to be erased in the light blue color for you if you need help.(sorry about it being in Thumbnail form, it wouldn't go into regular form for me) River  pelt  23:22, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, add shading to the muzzle and head, make the ear pink smaller, fix the blurred pupil, and do what Riverpelt said. -- Icestorm Peace 00:24, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Is This Better? I Erased and Made the pink in the ear smaller. Comments? Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 00:45, May 19, 2010 (UTC)


 * I still see the exact same spots that Riverpelt said...--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 18:50, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Uploaded it, Sorry First Chararts are normally not that good, AKA Mine... This Is My First
 * Uploaded it, Sorry First Chararts are normally not that good, AKA Mine... This Is My First


 * Can you not put the image in the heading as it messes up the page a little and looks messy, thanks -- Sandy star 11:36, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry Sandy, is that better? Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 01:49, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The line art is blurred in some places and I can still see those overlaps talked about eariler. I could help you with that if you need it. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  01:53, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ok Ashshadow! Sure you can help! Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 07:25, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching... 13:21, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

I've fixed the line art for you Sunspirit. As for the image, make the pupil black and be careful not to hit the line art while blurring. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:45, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, I can see it very clearly. Make the ear more pink. I don't know why, but the spots look un-natural to me. Sorry. FrostHeart 03:00, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

No It's Okay, Don't be sorry, I'll Work On it! :)

Owlwhisker (Ki) - For Approval
There are a lot of discussions, and this is section 36, so this should be under the limit, but if it's over then please let me know. Image-wise, this is by far fail. I know that the stripes are way too dark, but when I lighten them you can't see them. Comments and suggestions? 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 02:19, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, just blur the tabby stripes a little more. =) Poppystorm Flight of an Eagle 18:00, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 6   Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 23:39, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good! Darken the paw and head shading a tiny bit, and blur the ear pink on the left a bit. -- Icestorm Peace 00:22, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Our left, or the left ear? 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 22:24, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Left ear. -- Icestorm Peace 11:43, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. This is great!-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  15:57, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it's been a while. 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Last week of school! 21:16, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Everythings good, just highlight the front paws FrostHeart 03:02, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

My shading style has the paws with darker shading rather than with highlights, so I don't think I need to add them, but if I should then I will. Also, please put a link to your user page in your sig. 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Last week of school! 23:41, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Ice, the paws look fine. You don't need to add them. Blur the highlights again. Quailflight 09:27, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (Ki) ~ For Approval


Sorry again for my terrible activity level, but I decided to look for a kitty to do. ^-^ I'm in a pretty good mood right now (I acted as a mother to a litter of pups, and learned that one of them ended up being my neighbor's dog!!! *squeals*), so sorry if I'm over the page limit, but here's pebblefoot as a kit. Comments?  GOT REI NDE ER? Mumble! 15:59, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is really nice! Blur on the top of the head Quailflight  12:27, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

That's awsome news, Mumble! It's great to see you again :D As for the image; I don't see anything else wrong apart from what Quailflight said.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:43, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

^-^ On it!  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 19:50, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darnit! I did the adjustment and then it didn't save or something. xP I'll get him up soon.  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 22:31, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Theres a black dot on the right of the front legs. It's bothering me. Sorry. xD FrostHeart 03:01, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart that's part of the lineart. That doesn't need to changed. Quailflight 09:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Owlfur (W) -- For Approval
This probably isn't my best charar ever, but anyway, comments?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  22:51, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good. ^-^ I'd say to darken the shading and lighten the highlights because I can't really see them, but this is trully fabulous. ;)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 21:44, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading and lightened highlights, better?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:23, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. :)  Kit ties Rule da WORLD! Mumble sees a kitty!!! 23:18, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the bit of shading on the tail tip and also blur the ear pink-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:49, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ear pink and tail tip shading. What else?-- Snowflight  1  Thank StarClan Newleaf is here!  20:30, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:33, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading overlaps the highlights, but it needs to be a smooth connection. Try blurring the transition some. 6  Ice  thr  oat   8  Only two more weeks left of school! 19:00, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the places where the brown touches the white.

Whitepaw- For Approval
2nd charart of mine. Whitepaw. Comments :]

Frostheart, this is your second. You can only have one charart each time. So Whitepaw or Mousepaw? <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 22:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Skywish. May I delete this post then repost it as soon as Mousepaw is archived? FrostHeart 23:30, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

No, please don't delete your posts. Wait for a senior warrior to archive it. Which Whitepaw is this anyway?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:46, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. I didn't mean to sound mean. But I think this is pretty good. Just next time remember to put it on full-size image and save it in PNG form <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 00:17, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Though, it dosen't look like you coloured in his hind legs. Also blur the shading. Its very good! Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 01:13, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Mousepaw was declined and archived, so this can stay up. But I thought that Blackclaw had this reserved?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:23, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I didn't know. I'm not sure. I saw this on this page with the list of cats that needed to be done. Sorry I'm new, i didn't know like how to reserve and stuff. FrostHeart 01:50, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

No, Night (is it ok if i call you that?), I gave Whitetail to Zoe27 because Clovertail was taking a long time to get approved. I let Zoe27 take Whitetail because she really wanted to do her, so I figured it was only fair I did that. 雨 晶須  23:00, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

That was really sweet of you! Alright Frostheart, sorry about this. If you can find another character to use this as; you may keep this up. ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:09, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

lol sweet isn't exactly how I would describe myself... I can't find any other white cats for you to do, but if you darken it some, it could become Minnowtail's alternate apprentice image (is that reserved yet?) 雨  晶須  01:58, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, there's no color on the legs farthest from us. Quailflight 09:33, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. Dark hallows 20:53, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Can you see it now? FrostHeart 02:46, May 25, 2010 (UTC) You still need to color in the legs farthest from us. S n i c k e r s   7 Days! 19:38, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

---> Turn it into a png, and name it Whitetail.apprentice. -- Quailflight 09:30, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

I added color to the furthest leg. It's already in png. FrostHeart 14:26, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy(W) For Approval
Ok. I think this is below 35. Someone tell me if it's not...So constructments? <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 22:37, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! The colours don't look correct though. Darken the whole thing a bit and thicken the tail stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   23:45, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Done. Anything else? <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish <font color="#9966CC"> Let's go May 18th! 00:14, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. -- Icestorm Peace 00:30, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten and define the ear just a bit more. FrostHeart 02:01, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Anything else? <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish16 <font color="#9966CC"> Nannerpus, the banana peel 00:24, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make th ear pink more of a reddish color like her elder image  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 09:31, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The ear's too bright. FrostHeart 03:03, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's fine.Just blur it more. S n i c k e r s   7 Days! 19:39, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Reddish color like image, and blurred it more. <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish16 <font color="#9966CC"> Nannerpus, the banana peel 23:53, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Acorntail (D) For Approval
I tried Sandy but it was hard... Comments? <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 01:32, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be darker, I can't really see the eye color, and the pelt should be darker. Otherwise, he looks great! Nice tabby stripes! 雨 晶須  01:40, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 01:45, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice. Just define the earpink a little more.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:56, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="#330066">Mo <font color="#CC6600">on 03:03, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The ear is too red and define it more. Make sure you blur it more for a smooth transition from the light brown to dark FrostHeart 20:16, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, the ear pink is the same color as his warrior image  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:47, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Really? It looks really red on my screen. Maybe it's just my computer. Sorry for the the trouble. FrostHeart 03:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W) - For Approval
I know this is over the limit, but there are many discussions so I don't think it counts. Anyways, she fails. Comments? -- Icestorm Peace 22:59, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Shes not that bad. The only thing I see is that the highlights are too bright and the earpink is touching the lineart at the top of the ear. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  23:10, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty good. Make her eye color a little lighter orange, because it looks sort of red. Poppystorm Flight of an Eagle 23:13, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Highlighting on the tail is to big and bright. Add highlighting to her muzzle, and maybe darken the highlighting a lot. Her eyes are more red then amber. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching 00:36, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

. And I don't think their is highlights on her muzzle on her warrior image. -- Icestorm Peace 01:09, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are too bright. I think there are too much scars. Lighten the eye color and highlight the muzzle a bit FrostHeart 01:12, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Icestorm Peace 01:42, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Now the ear color is a little too brown/dull. Other than that, it's really good! :] FrostHeart 14:06, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I thought I was meant to do this... I left it a little to long, so I guess that's why. Anyway, it's way better than the one I did, just blur the tail highlights. Clar ris  sa! :)  16:56, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Icestorm Peace 02:40, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a tiny bit. Darken the tail shading and move the ear pink away from the line art and make it more triangular-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:26, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Icestorm Peace 14:15, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, she's beautiful! The only thing I see is her two upper scars are a bit out of place--one looks like it goes across her eye, and other looks like it's more on her forehead than her muzzle. Then the short-ish on her muzzle could be elongated a bit. Other than that, I think she's fantastic! Holly dapple  18:51, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Um...what do you mean? -- Icestorm Peace 20:32, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think she's talking about the scars on her face. Use as a reference for the scars. And I think the scars need to be thinned some. 雨 晶須  17:40, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- Icestorm Peace 19:22, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the scars a more pink and the ear is too dull now. I think the highlighting is a bit out of place and/or too bright. FrostHeart 20:15, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

It's in the same spaces and as bright as her warrior image. -- Icestorm Peace 20:20, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry if I wasn't clear enough. I did mean the scars on her muzzle. Like, there are three scars that you drew, right? There's one that looks like it goes across her eye and one just above it that's bugging me a little. It's probably just me being picky. If it looks weird, forget it. The highlights on her tail look kind of weird near the tip. Holly dapple  00:27, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Should I lighten it? -- Icestorm Peace 12:04, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Not the whole thing, no. I'll do you a diagram of what I'm talking about, if you want. It looks like there's a chip of of her highlights near the tip, if that helps you at all. Holly dapple  20:37, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I saw what you meant. -- Icestorm Peace 20:27, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more  Nightfall It sailed through the east, just as bright as a torch... 04:34, May 2, 2010 (UTC) 01:36, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:purple;">ICEY Wait, that's not how you spell Icy! 01:44, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps run the dodge tool over the whole image once or twice; she looks too dark to me  Nightfall It sailed through the east, just as bright as a torch... 04:34, May 2, 2010 (UTC) 01:45, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplenose (A) For Approval
fail,fail,such a fail.The sun is the left corner not the right.That's why the shading is on the bottom. S n i c k e r s 11 Days! 23:35, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

You'll have to resave the blank. Here:



Also, look at a turtorial for the eyes. And I can't see much shading.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 23:54, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I resized it:

It's going to need to be blurred a lot more to look like her other images and shading. Dark hallows 01:44, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr's blurring tool is very bad,but I'll try. S n i c k e r s  8 Days! 21:09, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

CoughUseGIMPcoughcough ;) The blurring tool is at least twice as strong as pixlr's. insane  brick'd 21:39, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thats's why I don't use Pixlr... GIMP is so much better (I also have photoshop, but never use it...) Dark hallows 23:12, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to get on any art program for a couple days....Dunno why.Give me ummm 4 days. S n i c k e r s  7 Days! 18:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a lot more. And the line art is messed up at the eye area. FrostHeart 03:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said, I'll try to blur it more. S n i c k e r s  7 Days! 19:45, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Furled Bracken - For Approval


I counted them all and I believe this is 33. My first Sharp Claw :D I really loved making this image as I have this new little diagram to look at about different tabby markings. Its very helpful and I wanted to try it out for once. I must say, it helped me well with my new approach of the mackeral pattern :3 Comments--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 02:50, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

make him more of a ginger cat <span style="color:red;font-family:Tempus Sans ITC;background:yellow;border:1px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">iceyfang 04:07, May 21, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Can you define that more please? As I took a while in picking the colors because he's a dark ginger cat just like Russetfur so I took the idea from there..unless you want to aim for an orange ginger cat.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 04:26, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes make it look more brown coloured. Maybe make them more gingery. Darken the ear pink. Thin out the thick stripe on his back a bit.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:37, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Updated I burned the image some and thin out the stripe. How's this?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 15:03, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I still think it looks a little brown; perhaps saturate it some  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:10, May 21, 2010 (UTC)


 * The means the lighten right..? Oops and I accidently uploaded it if thats what you meant, but I didn't finish since I'm not sure if that's what you meant--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:20, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, saturate is the sponge tool (that's what it is on pixlr, I'm not sure about gimp or photoshop) the saturate tool doesn't brighten, it makes it more vibrant.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:31, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what that is on gimp but I saturated it on pixlr. How's this?--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 20:48, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

It's too red. Desaturate it.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 22:27, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

And the stripes look like their smudged on him instead of blurred. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 23:58, May 21, 2010 (UTC)


 * I think I finally got it and I didn't smudge anything on him at all. I don't believe in that.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 00:09, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes more reddish or orangish. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 22:09, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

This could be my moniter but, its to red, try desaturating it some more. Dawnleaf StarClan is watching... 13:07, May 24, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'll be away until May 31 because I must go to Florida with my dad. Plus my GIMP is acting up at the moment as it continues to freeze whenever I open it.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 23:46, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Birdy (For Approval)
Here's Birdy from The Lost Warriors manga trilogy. I saw her listed on Nightfall's list of cats that needed images as a kittypet, so I reserved her. She's my first cat, and I like her especially because we almost named one of our cats "Birdy" :). So, comments? See anything that I might work on? Holly  dapple  05:05, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not really sure if she would need a kittypet image since this blank is used for adult kittypets and she was a kit. If needed take the earpink out of thr right (our right) ear and this doesn't look much like her kit image. The image on a whole is really good. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  14:22, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Ashshadow, and you should add a white pixel to both of her eyes. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 14:35, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with both of you, actually, but I did her picture because she was listed on Nightfall's list of cats that needed pictures, quote "Birdy: Kittypet Image Needed". Check it out for yourselves. I fixed the pixel and tried to make it more like her kit--I added a gray splotch to her tail, I made her forepaw and hindpaw gray, and I ajusted the eyecolor--and added the white pixel (I can't believe I forgot that...). How do I re-upload the picture? Thanks. Holly dapple  17:42, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I know that it was listed as needing a kittypet image but people do make mistakes and im not sure if she meeds an adult image. That happened with Berrynose,Hazeltail, and Mousewhisker needing loner images. Anyway the way the image is facing the part you have white whoud actually be gray and gray partly white. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  18:11, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I'm not sure I got her in the right spot...anyway, I added the eye-white, as you can see, a splotch to the tail, and I made her tag gold so you can see it better. I see your point, Ashshadow, but even if I do withdraw/get it declined, I'd like to get her right (it's too bad we don't have kit blanks for kittypet/loner/rogue/Tribe kits). Anyway, does she need to be even gray-er? I think I got the splotch on the face right, but do you think I should ad more gray around the hindleg, foreleg, and that spot on the flank? Holly dapple  18:38, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail. Darken the arm, tail and face shading. Add more white to the eyes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   21:32, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm very sorry if I did make a mistake. However, Firestar has a kittypet image; but he was a kit when he was a kittypet  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:45, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I thought he was apprentice age. Thats what he joined the clan as. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:52, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

But an apprentice still isn't an adult  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:54, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

I know but its not really a kit either. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:56, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more shading to the white blotches and define the ear to a more triangle shape. FrostHeart 20:13, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry about it, Nightfall; I have fun doing the chararts, whether it's just a pixel of the real Hollydapple (my weird cat Gertie), or if it's a pixel for approval! ;) You have a point about the Firestar-kittypet thing. I have this remark posted earlier--it's too bad we don't have kit blanks for kittypet/loner/rogue/Tribe cats. I'll fix the ear pink and I'll try adding more shading to the white splotches in a minute, FrostHeart. The ear pink does look kinda funky right now. *Snickers embarrassedly*. Holly  dapple  23:09, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well acually, kit blanks can be used for any blank there is. See Frisk, and Tadpole for example. And acually, I was going to do Firestar's kit image; a kit with a collar drawn on it like Scourge's. But I changed my mind at the time, I don't remember why though xD  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Point taken. Fixed the ear pink and added a few pixels more of eye-white. I tried darkening the shading, but it looks kind of funky. Lemme try blurring it more in Adobe Photoshop 8. They have a great blurring tool. If it works, I'll try uploading again here. Holly dapple  23:57, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''Adobe Photoshop 8's blurring tool worked well, I think. Do you think I ought to smudge the head patch more? I think she looks better now than she did the last time I re-uploaded her. Holly dapple  00:10, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but the small ball next to the kittypet chain needs to be colored gold or yellow. FrostHeart 03:10, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''I thought I had already fixed that. I must have forgotten to save my changes. I did it silver first because there aren't a lot of kittypets (that I've seen, anyway) with silver tags. But it sort of smudges in. I made the tag bronze-colored. Should I try lightening it some more? I also darkened the nose, so it doesn't look so baby-pink. Holly dapple  18:25, May 25, 2010(UTC)

Just so everyone knows what I mean, when I said "but it sort of smudges in", I meant the silver tag camoflauges with the gray-and-white pelt, not that the silver tag smudged in with the charart. I didn't word that the right way; sorry! :) Holly  dapple  18:38, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (Ki) For Approval
I like how she turned out :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:47, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white paws. Put a large black spot on her right back --> Add the markings to her haunch-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:52, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the earpink on her left (our right) ear. I cant really see it. Besides that and what Nightshine said it's really good. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  22:54, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks! Better?  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:03, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

She's great. Better than mine. Darken the shading on <--- side. I can barely see it. And make the ear pink on the same side smaller. -- Icestorm Peace 14:17, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thank you :3 Alright, I made the ear pink on that side a bit smaller. But as for darkening the shading on that side, that's where the light source is coming from.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 17:38, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

ts really really good! And, to be joking, if you look at it from a certain angle, it looks like it has a beard and a uni-brow. ^^ Good job! :D FrostHeart 03:12, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Talon(R) - For Approval
Comments?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:49, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Either darken the stripes or lighten his base color a bit; the stripes stand out much more on his cave-guard image. Otherwise, great :) insane  brick'd 02:04, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded how is it know?-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   03:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Night! What I would say is lighten the pelt by a itty little bit on the tail, or that's just my opinion :) <font color="#50C878">Sky <font color="#6495ED">wish16 <font color="#9966CC"> Nannerpus, the banana peel 03:36, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened tail a bit-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   06:58, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

His legs are a bit too dark and the scars on his head need to be more visible. His stripes are great though! 雨 晶須  17:36, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the legs a bit and make the ear color more pink. FrostHeart 20:06, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I love how he looks, Nightshine, and I think the tabby stripes are nice, though they could be blurred just a tiny bit. I envy anyone who can do tabby stripes, because mine look neurotic. Seriously. Anyway, I like him, but shouldn't he have mud streaks on his pelt? I was wondering, because even though this is Talon as a rogue, wouldn't he, Rock, and Bird still have had mud streaks? Holly dapple  00:16, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I lightened the legs some more. I'm not sure about the mud streaks. There aren't any on his caveguard image either. The stripes are supposed to stand out so I didn't blur them with a large blur tool. I took the ear pink from his caveguard image-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:52, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

I see about the tabby stripes. That's weird that there aren't any mud streaks on his cave-guard pixel either; there ought to be some there too. Anyway, I think he looks very nice. :) Holly  dapple  01:21, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

He needs a scar. Snow storm  02:27, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

The scar is on his other eye-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   04:22, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Highlight the tail and forepaws more. FrostHeart 03:12, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really think that those areas need to be highlighted, that's where the shading is. This looks very good to me, I don't see anything else wrong at the moment :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:31, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers For Approval.
I think this is my best charart yet! How can I improve it? Clarrissa My Talk!16:30, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten his pelt some and add/darken the shading. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  16:37, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not some...a lot my friend. Its really close to the regular black of the lineart so when shading it wouldn't work out too well. Also darken the ear pink some.--<span style="color:#00A1E0; background:silver; border:3px dashed gray; -moz-border-radius: 1em;color:#00A1E0">Shimmerpool ★Follow the stars...☆ 17:11, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Clarrissa, you'll have to redo the image, as trying to lighten it won't do much good. I suggest you color it with this color: #343434. 雨 晶須  17:34, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but I don't see any work done but the pelt color, the eye and the ear. You'll have the tweek or redo the image a lot. FrostHeart 03:13, May 25, 2010 (UTC) Reuploaded I did what what you told me too. I hope it's better. &#123;&#123;SUBST:User:Clarrissa koins/Signature}} 19:06, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think Dark Whiskers is supposed to be black, this is completely gray  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:50, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sagekit (Alt) - For Approval
There are seven discussions and one withdrawn image, so this is just under the limit. It never stated her eye color, so I just gave her blue like all kits before their eye color changes. Her stripes start to get rather hard to see on the highlights, but that's not bad, since stripes start out not very easy to see. -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 22:04, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I love it! Darken the face stripes a bit more and the tail stripes-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   00:46, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Gοlδεnpαω T e n s o u ! 02:38, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rock (R) - For Approval
Ok. I know it's my fifth picture, but this is my first time using highlights so it's pretty bad.-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 20:16, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is just lovely, Moonflight :D Blur the ear pink a bit more, and there is a gray pixel on his front leg farthest from us  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:19, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I'm glad you like him, Night. That means alot. :) Anything else I could fix?-- Moonflight A Star In Her Own Mind... 21:39, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) For Approval
Here is My first Character Art! I know its not as good as somew of the other ones, but its my first offer. Jayfire Blind Fire 14:58, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights and shading. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 19:42, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights aren't really necessary. However, Riverpelt is right about the shading. Look at these tutorials, they'll help you with shading; and highlights if you want to do them :)  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:47, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? i added some shading like you said. Jayfire Blind Fire 14:58, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blend it in a bit more. Riverpelt Heart of Amber 01:28, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? I blended the shading more. Jayfire Blind Fire 14:58, May 27, 2010 (UTC)undefined 14:44, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W) For Approval
So here he is. He's my first one, so I know he's not that great, but what do you think? Let me know if this is under the limit; I think it is, but I'm not sure. Skydragon 18:13, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow this is really good perhaps where you put the stripe below his ear you should've put another stripe as on his leader image he has two grey stripes either side. Hope that helps :D :)Wildear~101:) 18:32, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but the file needs to be named Gorsestar.warrior.png. Jpg files dont have the best quality and look pixilated. Besides that darken the shading a bit. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  19:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice :) Thicken the stripes a bit, in addition to what Wildear and Ashshadow have said  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Is this better? Skydragon 21:30, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Join?
Can i join i also need help getting a blank on my gimp Birdwing 20:14, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

I've added you in :) Welcome to PCA! Now, I don't use gimp, but both Bramble and Insaneular do; and both are very good at explaining layers.  ☻Nightfall☻ Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:29, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (W)- For Approval
So I counted the sections and this should be within the limit. Well, here's Firestar as a warrior. I actually like how it came out. Ashshadow. Warrior of StormClan  21:05, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights a bit smaller. darken the tail stripes and blur all the stripes some more. Darken the ear pink.-- N i g h t s h i n e    {   22:18, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

He looks awesome, Ashshadow, good job! Try blurring the highlights and the tabby stripes. Other than that, it looks fantastic! Holly dapple  01:21, May 27, 2010 (UTC)