Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Fircone (Ro) ~ Redone
Soo I lost the file for this. How the hell did I do the pattern before O_o OA was Rainlegs, Skt (I think?), and a redo by me. Redone because of the tortie vote. 18:11, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file? Some of the colors look a bit too orange/yellow. 19:30, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, please. Although I think some of the problem is the highlights. 20:34, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I think there is a tad more spacing between the markings, but I'm not so sure about that, given that this is facing a different side. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:16, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ Tweaked
OA’s are Iceheart22 Stoneclaw33 and tweakers are Mount Everest and Ducksplash. Tweaked to remove underbite. 07:50, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lets see... Could you add more light on the main body? I don't know, it just seems really dark. Nice job! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:03, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the light on the main body is fine. 10:04, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I still think it could be defined on the legs a little bit, if not on the main body. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 10:05, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

???...second...well...another opinion please? 01:47, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. 01:51, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think the light on the legs could be defined- it looks like the entire thing is in shadow.

Reupload Wouldn't hurt to do it anyway. 02:12, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the overall shading a bit? It looks a bit flat to me...but that could be my iPad screen 03:39 Wed Oct 28

Reupload 05:40, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Rain That Passes Quickly (E) (Alt) - Tweaked
I do understand I may have to blur the shading more. OAs were Iceheart, Sweetflower, and Rowanflight. Tweaked for define shading, and unsaturated scars/earpink 12:21, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, honestly. Also, it's Rowanflight, not Rowanheart.

reups 12:55, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. 16:08, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, please. 20:48 Wed Oct 28

Brackenpelt (W) - Tweaked
OA be Beebs. 13:17, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

the colour doesnt seem to fit in.....maybe add some more ginger over it. 18:50, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 07:40, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrow Fur (Ki) ~ Redone
OA was Bbun, redone to match Turtle Tail. The original one is 23452328364853762583 times better...

Define the shading. 16:44, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

re-upsy

Hawkfrost (DF) ~ Tweaked
I was the OA. White chest had to be removed. 16:42, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Minor thing, but I had to rename this. It should be df, not DF. Yes, it's a tedious thing, I know, but the filename wasn't right. Could you also brighten up the white a bit?

To be honest, all the white is in shadow, so I feel like if it was lightened it'd look really unnatural. It's already brighter than it should be in shadow, just so it appear more white. It's clear that it's white right now, so personally I feel like it's good as is.

Poppycloud (Q) ~ Tweaked
the OA of the new blank version was Beebs, tweaked to remove white. 16:58, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I can still see a little bit of white on the tail tip 18:46, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

and i think her belly too? either way theres a weird looking patch. 06:04, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I see some white on >>>> this side of her face, too. Nice job! ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:12, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (L) - Tweaked
Best cat is here. Gray Wing is love. Gray Wing is life. Love Gray Wing forever. OA was Raven, he needed to be darker. Comments on best cat? 19:01, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Its Bestest Cat <3 smooth the shading on the tail on bestest cat. 01:24, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

worst cat ever in the series smooth out the shading on the legs too 04:31, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I honestly think the shading is fine... It's been like this for a while, and if she smooths it out, you guys are just going to tell her to define it again.

Yea. I honestly like this shading

Larksong (Q) - Redone
Omg I'm so proud of this. OA was StormSongz :p 22:29, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the patches more please. Nice job! 03:29, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Could you expand the shading on the main body? Beautiful. ~ Blossomstream The War Is Over 07:13, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (Ro) - Tweaked
Darkened, used the color from Gray Wing's ES and Cloudy gave me permission to tweak the shading. I messed it up I'm sorry 01:17, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see any shading at all, now... Define and darken it.

Brackenpelt (k) ~ Tweaked
oa be me 03:16, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit.

Re-uploaded I tried without the file 01:50, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lightningtail (Ki) - Tweaked
I no longer feel like I want to gag seeing this image.

Re-uploaded.

Lightningtail (D) - Tweaked
Ahh, much better.

Lighten the black a few shades? I can't see lineart, shading, or anything, and usually my computer displays brighter than it should, rather than darker. Same applies for the kit.

um i can see it just fine 23:11, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Well I can't. I'm not saying it has to be changed, but I am pointing out that currently I can't see anything whatsoever, and it's definitely not my computer screen. If I squint and hold it close enough to my face, I can make out a few lighter streaks (texture, highlights?), but that's about it. Which leads me to believe it would benefit from being lightened a couple shades.

Re-uploaded. It's a mixture of texture and highlights.

Way better! Maybe define the shading/light on the tail a bit? Looks a tad flat. The rest looks great!

Re-uploaded. It was covered in shading lmao.

Olivenose (Star) - Redone
That pattern was impossible to match what was I thinking? I've redone this pattern about four times, I'm somewhat satisfied with it now since it's on the opposite side of the other images. I might still redo it in the next upload though if I can get it better. Hopefully it's ok to post this before the other one's archived? My reservation's coming kinda close to expiring, so I didn't want to take any chances. I need to stop procrastinating. OA was beebs, redone to match the description.

could you desaturate the shading? 07:31, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (Star) ~ Tweaked
OA = me. Tweaked for darkness 07:36, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

I just realized I misnamed it oops :x 07:36, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Kestrelwing (MC. alt) - Tweaked
OA is Wildheart. 11:20, October 29, 2015 (UTC)