Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

=Discussion= Take it to the discussion page

=For Approval= Take it to the approval page

=Tweaking=

Skystar (L) ~ Tweaked
19:36, 6/13/2018

Dawnpelt (Star) - Redone
19:58 Wed Jun 13 19:58, June 13, 2018 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Q) - Redone
20:18 Wed Jun 13

The eye color looks different from the star's. 20:20, 6/13/2018

There's more space in the StarClan image to add color; I think it's fine.

I took it from the rogue for both, which was first in the set. 20:23 Wed Jun 13

The stripes on < leg on the star look thinner than the ones here

Jumper (R) ~ Redone


There shouldn't be black on the chest I don't think

Reuploaded

Crookedstar (D) - Tweaked
dorsal stripe. Most recent OA was Shinx.

Waste around <- front leg and <- back leg

reups there was a few more patches of waste. surprised it didn't get pointed out during approval

Spiderleg (Ki) - Redone


Speck of waste on -> side of head

reups didn't see waste, but there was some blurry lineart for some reason

Houndleap (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was me. Tweaked to add <--- ear tip back. 02:19, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Mudfur (MC) ~ Redone
Redone to match. Again, look at this shading. How wonderful it is ughhh 03:53, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Looks good! Would you add a bit of depth to the eyes, and perhaps make the shading a liiiittle less reddish?

Reups Thanks haha 13:49, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Define the pale parts^^ Also, I think there wouldn't be quite so many spots on the tail, to match the other images c:

Reups 20:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Fleck (Lo) - Tweaked
Tweaked to remove white from face, most recent OA is Ivystripe. 14:42, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

I know this isn't what it's up for, but could you perhaps add a slight amount of light to the tail?

Re-uploaded. 21:03, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Millie (W) ~ Tweaked
15:56, 6/14/2018

can you maybe thicken the lineart on the tear just a bit? 21:30, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Barley (Ro) - Redone
21:25, June 14, 2018 (UTC)