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Guardian Cat Blanks ~ For Approval
Is this right? I don't know what to name the file, or the heading. I can change it later if needed. But thanks everyone who voted for me!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 01:41, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I'm not sure how approving a blank works, but I would wait until someone who has been here longer than me says how to name it. Anyways, could you make the ears a little longer on both blanks? Many cats have longer ears than what is shown on the blank. I think that's how comments on blanks works. I would wait until someone who has seen a blank approved to comment before you do this though. (Just to make sure I'm commenting on this right). 12:08, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

The front legs should be longer and the front paws flatter CØØKIE (talk) 12:22, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

I believe  the heading needs to be Guardian Cat Blanks - For Approval. Can you make the inner lineart a bit thicker? (If that makes sense) Most of it appears to be 1px

the eyes should be somewhat smaller, and maybe make the longhaired tail more fluffy. it is long fur, after all. 16:12, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe the nose shouldn't be connected to the eyes, or spaced out a bit more? :) 17:56, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Don't know a lot about anatomy, but I think it only looks connected because of how the face is situated/the direction the cat's head is facing?

I think it's ok, when the eyes get made a bit smaller there'll be more distance to represent the bridge of the nose. maybe make the nose slightly smaller too 18:25, October 21, 2017 (UTC)

Make the tail a bit longer.

The left front leg looks a bit smaller and squished than the others. 16:57, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

I'll upload later tonight, sorry for such a wait for the past couple days. I'll rename them gc.long.png and gc.short.png when I get the chance tonught and thanks for all the critiques. I appreciate it. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 22:30, October 22, 2017 (UTC)

Actually, Cosmo, can you rename them guardian cat.long.png and guardian cat.short.png? 00:07, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

Yes I will. Also, I'll need to upload them under two different files as I realized it as these are only under one file. I'll get around to that sometime tonight or tomorrow! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 00:08, October 23, 2017 (UTC)

It's good, Cosomo. Blanks are not held to the same time restrains as regular images are; that would be impossible, due to the fact that anatomy is difficult and forcing someone to produce a new blank in a short amount of time by restricting them is just asking for rushed and sloppy work. Doesn't mean you can take two weeks to upload though, it just means that the one-month limit does not apply here.

'''Re-uploaded. '''Thanks for all the nice comments and sorry for taking so long to upload. I may edit the eyes again. They still bother me, lol. But I think it's looking better! Also, uploaded with two different files and renamed them with the proper naming, and thanks to Appledash and Jaycie for being so kind about this! It means a lot. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 23:21, October 24, 2017 (UTC)

You're doing a great job, Cosmo! Anyways, could you make the tail on the short-haired blank end a little thinner? If I know one thing about cat anatomy, it's that a cat's tail becomes thinner as it nears the end of it. 01:17, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

Make the eyes a little wider and more oval, and space them out a bit. Also I feel like the hip should be wider on both. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 12:54, October 25, 2017 (UTC)

I think the ears should still be a little bit smaller and more pointed, the lineart around the paws is still a little thin, plus the front paws seem....small for lack of a better word? like when you look up a cat sitting down, you know what I mean? 04:34, October 30, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry for taking so long to upload. I got caught up with homework, and then I got really sick. Hopefully, I'll upload tomorrow!! C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:42, October 31, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I still think the face is way off. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 02:55, November 2, 2017 (UTC)

to match the style of the other blanks, i think you should make the fur tips less round, if you get what i mean.

Could you widen the -> eye on both blanks by like one pixel? It looks a little off to me compared to the other eye. 10:20, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you thicken the paw lineart just a bit? Particularly the two front paws. And this is beautiful! :D 13:37, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Could you also thicken the eye lineart? ErmineGlow (talk) 22:36, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

I think the thickness of the eye lineart is fine. On all of the other blanks, the eye lineart is one pixel thick, so why make it thicker here? 22:55, November 3, 2017 (UTC)

Perhaps make the nose(s) a bit smaller?

When will be introduced schemes of shadow on this chararts if chararts be introduced in wiki? I can not wait to start making Fierce! ::::D – 14:14, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Please don't comment unless it's a critique. I know it's taking a while for me to upload each time, but please be patient. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #cat lady 14:31, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''These are turning out much better. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:28, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

they are, dude. I think you should thicken the linear art on the tail a little bit.

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:58, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Thicken lineart on paws and ears

I think the ear lineart is fine, but agreed on the paws ^^ These look awesome so far!

I think the cheeks are a bit too wide, maybe make the face a bit more narrow? Jayie Just yo u wait~ 16:46, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

The right hind leg seems to be sticking out to far. Maybe narrow it. Gosh Cosmo this is a great blank! 13:30, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:30, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Larksong (SS) (Alt. W) - For Approval
Just sitting here making alts, man. 21:20, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Cute! Smooth out the shading and define it on the tail. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 21:25, November 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! 02:26, November 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the white just a bit more. Nice pattern choice; I like it. 8D

Reuploaded Is this any better? And thank you! ^^ 01:20, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Recede the shading on the chest a bit. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 16:49, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 17:47, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light source a bit on the farthest front leg. 13:34, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 18:34, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on the front legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:06, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded 00:30, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Onestar (Star) ~ For Approval
Grey muzzle kitties~ <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:00, November 9, 2017 (UTC)

I actually think you should remove the gray muzzle. It says in Darkest Night that he was young and strong again, and the gray muzzle was from him being old.

you mind lightening the shading? `

'''Re-uploaded. '''No more grey muzzle kitties. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:54, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. Jayie Just yo u wait~ 16:51, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

'''Re-uploaded. '''<font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 00:59, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Nectarpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Sweet name.

Can you define the shading on the back paw furthest away from us? 14:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading on the left side of the face should be moved to the right, since that looks like where the shadow is coming from on the rest of the body, also define the shading on the front paw furthest from us. 18:15, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Define shading on two paws furthest from us

re-up Light source is from above, slightly to the right, if that makes sense.

Since the light source is from above, can you add a little more shading to the chin and neck area? 18:12, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth the shading a little on the legs closest to us. 15:54, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

re-up Might fix some things.

Cloudmist (Alt. Lo) ~ For Approval
Yup – 15:43, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth those dark patches of shading a little on the belly and hindleg furthest from us, the white on the back paws and belly look a bit gray. 18:13, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups – 09:18, November 13, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the back leg furthest from us. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 03:06, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups – 06:52, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking a bit from where the neck shading meets the front leg shading. 18:28, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the neck shading and define the shading depth on the head? 00:35, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

I think the eye colour is leaking a bit? Nice Job! ErmineGlow (talk) 13:18, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

What means "leaking"? – 14:10, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Reups – 14:19, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Erase that one black pixel underneath the chin. 15:58, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Echosong (Star) - CBA
Eh. 16:31, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading on the base of the tail and flank a bit? She's so pretty! 18:09, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reups Thank you! 20:05, November 10, 2017 (UTC)

She should have a notch in -> ear, shouldn't she?

Reups Dunno why I like the word 'notch' 01:52, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the legs and tail?

Reups 19:03, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head and the ear pink in <-- ear. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:59, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reups 18:26, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?

Fringepaw (A) - CBA
Shorthaired bc genetically impossible to be longhaired

Define the shading depth. 00:34, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Played around with tint a bit. Hope this is better

CBA?

Dragonfly (Lo) ~ For Approval
Eh.. 17:12, November 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on every leg?

Can you define the stripes a bit? 00:27, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded  13:28, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink and shading a smidge? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:58, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth. <span style="">22:02, 11/15/2017

Sandynose (W) ~ For Approval
This really sucks :^/ <span style="">09:36, 11/12/2017

Define the shading on the sll the legs except for the front one closest to us. --ErmineGlow (talk) 15:50, November 12, 2017 (UTC)

Can you define/add stripes on the legs?

Re-uploaded. <span style="">23:30, 11/12/2017

Re-uploaded. Color change. <span style="">23:37, 11/12/2017

Define the leg shading a smidge? <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:58, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Can you specify please? Like, all the legs? <span style="">05:41, 11/14/2017

Yea. All of the legs. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 05:46, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. <span style="">21:32, 11/15/2017

Jasper (KP) - For Approval
The paw change is the amputated toe btw. Its intentional. <span style="">21:31 Sun Nov 12

Smooth out the shading a little bit. This is beautiful! <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:56, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Is there a lighter pixel on the collar's one end, or are my eyes messing with me? It seems out of place when compared to the colors around it.... also speaking of colors, I see a certain collar color looks oddly like a military unit's coloring from one of my favorite games ever. =P

I think you're seeing the light spot on the bell/tag/whatever it is <span style="">18:21 Tue Nov 14

Reuploaded <span style="">23:44 Wed Nov 15

Fringepaw (Lo) - For Approval
Wow, sorry for deserting the wiki! I'll try to be more active. 01:59, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the facial shading a bit? I know it may hard to see it. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 02:57, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Cosmo! 03:13, November 14, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded again Waste. :P 00:16, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Define the light a little on the tail and hindleg furthest from us. Maybe smooth the shading a little, unless it's supposed to be a bit bold. 17:57, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Gravelpaw (Lo) - For Approval
This isn't very good but don't worry about it

Smooth out the shading.

reups redid the shading

reups again messed with texture

Sandynose (App) - For Approval
not sure about this shading... 17:54, November 15, 2017 (UTC)

Possibly define the sahding on the ginger parts of the front legs? Also, I think the tail shading would be switched, but I'm probably just tired idk.

Re-uploaded. the shading is supposed to be coming from the bottom, so the tail should be good. 01:03, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the ginger bits again? ErmineGlow (talk) 02:26, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

The stripes on the warrior seem softer than these ones are. I think Broken might have blurred those ones a bit more.

Twigbranch (W) ~ For Approval
All colors from her other images. Comments? 00:52, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on her legs. 00:57, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading depth and define the ear pink

Reuploaded. The shading on these blanks is soo difficult. 01:03, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't match with the other images in my opinion. They seem more darker. <font face="Brush Script MT,cursive" color="451179" style="font-size:17px;text-shadow:4px 4px 4px #b278ed;">C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 <font face="Papyrus" color="3a3ce4" style="font-size:10px;">#cat lady 01:22, November 16, 2017 (UTC)

I think it's just the size; iirc, Bluestar is the OA of her other two images, so I think all of Twigbranch's colors should be the same.