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Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o  ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either.

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie  Unwritten words~ 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  -  Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? 20:09, 10/24/2014

Re-uploaded - I tried x3 -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll work on it, in a few hours. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

You see the shading that's on...uh, I want to say the lower back? Pretty sure that's what that is... can you smooth that out a bit? I'm not sure the smudges should be so visible.

Re-uploaded - shshsh-ading, dun dun dun. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  10:49, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks quite blotchy on the tail. 11:00 Mon Oct 27

It actually looks blotchy all over^^ give it all a little blur or smudge over..whichever you do. 22:37, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Should be slightly better but it may appear blotchy because that's how I shade... ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  23:16, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Try using Gaussian blur (if you don't already/don't blur shading) 1:33 PM, Tue Oct 28, 2014

Re-uploaded - I do use Gaussian blur, but I did it on this one, but the shading messed up. So I've tried to blur it as much as I can without messing it up. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє

What opacity are you blurring on? For blurring shading I usually just put it on 100(the highest setting on GIMP). Blur it some more. If you were not already, try blurring on 100 opacity. 13:28, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

I blur it on 30. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred with opacity on 100 before turning it back down to 30. Hopefully I can master this. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  20:58, October 29, 2014 (UTC)

It's looking good! Define the tail shading some more. 03:59, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

the shading on the haunch and face could use more blurring/smudging. 12:46, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - I never realized what a pain, shading on solid cats was. In the future I think I'll stick to tabbies and such. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє  13:17, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

oOPS, i'll fix the face later ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   13:19, October 30, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on this ---> paw and blur the shading on this <--- paw. 14:32, November 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth the shading out. 3:03 PM, Sun Nov 2, 2014

Re-uploaded - the gaussian blur is everywhere -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:45, November 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the light on the paws. 20:26, 11/4/2014

Re-uploaded - This shading is KILLING ME xD -- ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   20:35, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste by (her) left paw, and the shading is leaking from the lineart a bit on the side. 22:15, November 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - You must have eagle vision, I couldn't even see it until I squinted.. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   16:34, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Could you add a highlight onto the left shoulder, the shading there looks a bit strange with the way the lights going. Also, can you define the tail shading a bit? Brick  The Bite of '87  17:17, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - DUN, I swear if someone tells me to tweak the shading I'll scream. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   18:37, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is looking a little blotchy; try either blurring/smudging it to smooth it out a bit? Also, there should be more shading on the face, and the tail and paw's shading could be defined a bit. im sorry. -- 22:32, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, first of I uploaded an old file stupid me, second of all I'll work on it tomorrow and finally I am screaming   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:33, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the nose pink, so I suggest putting some nose pink. 02:54, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Actually tiger, s/he shouldn't put any nosepink on this image. It's a black (Well, dark gray) cat. They usually have black noses. 13:36, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - more screaming I couldn't find the old file (probably didn't save it) scrapped the shading and re-did it; the changes are here - http://oi60.tinypic.com/103h6wy.jpg   — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   17:09, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and strengthen the shading on the paws. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:17, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Lightened shading, strengthened paw shading (made it darker there) and I changed the position of the eyes, which I think have made quite the difference. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   11:38, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm.. define the tail shading. Also, I think the area near the nearest leg has receding shading. 20:18, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Defined tail shading, and expanded shading on nearest leg. Think I'm getting the hang of shading... — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   11:06, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

The shading seems to be bleeding away from the edge of the belly. Maybe smudge it back towards the line? Jayie Unwritten words~ 07:57, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

The shading on the left front leg is blotchy, smooth it out a little? 15:52 Tue Nov 11

Withdrawing because of work. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   21:58, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I'll take over. I changed the heading for you :)  17:23 Thu Nov 13

Reups 18:05 Thu Nov 13

Lighten the shading, and possibly blur it. I spy a tiny bit of shading leaking from the lineart on the bottom of the side. 22:18, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups 16:50 Fri Nov 14

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ For Approval
this is rubbish. Sooooo rubbish. 19:33 Thu Oct 23

Lighten up the front paws a bit and the shading. It's fine ^^ Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 19:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks 19:40 Thu Oct 23

Lol did you forget the earpink? I don't see a trace of it anywhere. 20:00, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

The base color appears to be a little bit darker than her kit and apprentice (both of which I made), so have a screenshot of an unshaded head from the apprentice for the coloring.

Blur the shading some, it looks blotchy. 13:26, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I kinda like this.....I accidently deleted the ear-pink layer before I saved :'D 16:28 Fri Oct 24

I'd say to add a little more earpink. Its really nice, though ^^ 16:47, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Nah I think she has enough on there. A lot of images have been approved with that type of earpink style. 18:10, October 25, 2014 (UTC)

Reups You saw it when it had been reuploaded, Frosty lmao 18:19 Sat Oct 25

Define the shading depth a tad, and I think the shading is receding from the lineart in some places. 17:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, changes might be showing, or they could be not. IDK 17:39 Sun Oct 26

Hm it looks like you darkened the shading. Defining the depth of the shading does include dakening, but it is really about adding different dimensions to it. So maybe you could lighten it back up a shade, and then where the body is farthest from the light, darken it; In crevices, in between 2 body parts, wherever the farthest parts are from the light, that's kind of where you give it a little darken. I hope this helps. =) 12:36, October 27, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I think I did this right? 13:02 Mon Oct 27

Reups, blurred the shading <span style="">18:13 Mon Oct 27

The one back paw looks pretty black. Lighten it up a bit 13:57, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, ran the dodge tool over it a few times <span style="">14:05 Tue Oct 28

It appears the shading is leaking away from the lineart on the back. 23:27, October 28, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? <span style="">23:15, 10/29/2014

If you're still working, would you also define the depth of the tail shading? It looks flat. 22:28, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the front legs shading, and could you possibly blur/smudge the earpink just a tad bit more?-- 22:34, November 5, 2014 (UTC)

the shading is receding from the lineart, and can you smooth it out? it looks blotchy. 01:25, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Sorry, but it's been a week without uploads, Amber. You know the rules, and I gotta decline this. =(

I'll take over. 03:48, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

You don't appear to have reupped this, Shoon. Are you still working? 12:00, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry if I'm doing this wrong it's been a week since you said you're taking over, Shoon, sorry, but this'll have to be declined. Does anyone mind me taking over this? Sorry, I made a mistake. My apologies. 16:38, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

You can have it. I'm not in a mood to fight with the shading anymore, it really doesn't wanna cooperate. 20:45, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Okay, I'll take over. 21:21, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes should show later 22:46, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the body shading, please.

I hate making you do this, but define the shading on the upper part of the tail? 11:17, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes be here 16:43, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the body shading a tad more? Not much. 09:55, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reups This is as far as I'm willing to go, otherwise it'll look too flat. 18:37, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Snake (DotC) (Alt Ro) ~ For Approval
I don't like how this came out. =P -- 01:21, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

It looks fine don't beat yourself up lol. Define the texture a little, and define your lightsource. The head is telling me it's coming from one direction, and the body another, and the tail another. 12:59, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Texture is fine. <span style="">20:27, 11/6/2014

Texture looks alright to me, though it could be darkened a smidge. I agree about the lightsource though. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:29, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

I actually think if you just removed the shading along the back (but left a bit behind the head near the neck) that the light source would be fine. <span style="">20:32, 11/6/2014

Re upped  01:05, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

blur/smudge/whatever you do the shading on the neck and belly a bit <span style="">21:18, 11/9/2014

Reupped 22:20, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

Darken the shading.

Define the light on the face - liking the texture! 16:31, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re upped 23:19, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Hm, correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't there also be shading on parts of his back? Like, near his tail and extending a little more past the neck? I could be wrong, and if I am, I'm sorry. Also, please define the light on the legs; I don't think they'd all be in shade.

Re upped I defined the light on the legs. I didn't change the shading because I did that and other users said it made the light source confusing. 00:16, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Star Flower (Kit) - CBA
I love kittens :p comments? (I color picked from her rouge image)The Fox Girl (talk) 12:19, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Brighten the white up a bit, as it's looking a bit gray. I like this. =) 12:54, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Would you like the .xcf for this? It doesn't quite match.... 19:19, November 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 13:46, November 7, 2014 (UTC)

Either blur or smudge the earpink a tad? It looks a bit hard edged 14:43, November 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 09:44, November 9, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the left front leg, the hip, and give the shading on the tail more direciton - have it stick to the right edge of the tail, Nice job with the pattern. :) Jayie  Unwritten words~ 08:05, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 10:24, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

The legs look a bit grey. 16:29, November 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 10:04, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

Can you whiten them just a little more? 15:18, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's white enough. — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:57, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Sorrel- they don't need to be whitened too much, though.

Re-ups The Fox Girl (talk) 10:36, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

This is cute. CBA?

Littlebird (Star) ~ For Approval
Her name is cute:3 Changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/141112C/ezimba12232517187600.png 20:51, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

haha I wanted this. define the tail shading. This is lovely! =) 20:58, November 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on both visible front paws, please.

Re-ups Thanks Frosty:) 15:10, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

I thought Fuzzywing had her reserved? (still a good charart though ^^) 15:42, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Fuzzywing's reservation expired I believe ^^ I think Sziri's alright. 20:43, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Yup, Darkfrost is correct. I had actually removed that the other day (or yesterday, I can't remember), I believe. They got one week from the reservation date, but they hadn't posted, so their reservation expired. Hmm, now to the image.. could you still define the shading on <-- visible front paw, please?

Define the shading on the chest? — ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє   22:01, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups 16:42, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight/shading near the neck- it appears a tad too sharp, so if you wouldn't mind smoothing that out, then I think we could even CBA this. I quite like it and the image is looking beautiful.

Re-ups Thank you!:) Also,when will i become a warrior?I have more than 3 pictures approved. 11:26, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Quiet Rain (Lo) - CBA
I had a ton of fun with this pattern, and I tried to match Skt's shading style for this one, so it's smudged. ^^ Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:56, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Sooo pretty! Define the light on her legs a bit c: 15:17, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Defined the light on the legs, darkened the shading a touch, played around with shading, and tweaked the pattern a bit. I like this much better now. ^^ Jayie  Unwritten words~ 18:28, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Beautiful 17:32, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (Star) ~ For Approval
eh..colorpicked from elder. Comments? 23:27, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the main part of the body. Also give more depth to the eyes and smudge the ear pink into the ear a bit more.

The shading is throwing off the color a little bit; could you lighten it a tad? If you'd prefer not too, thats fine with me. 23:39, November 12, 2014 (UTC)

Lol wow I just realized you all were staring at the old version of the image for 24 hrs. I'm so sorry, I didn't notice that mine didn't overwrite the prev. version. I tried re-uploading it and here's a link to ezimba for my version. 13:15, November 13, 2014 (UTC)

Yours had been showing, and my comment still stands about the ear pink- please smudge it a bit more.

Well they hadn't for me. I'll re-upload later if I've got time. Is the shading better? I had changed it after you commented but then I saw the old version when I got on so I'd thought you were looking at the old. 14:43, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I think the shading should actually extend the rest of the way, like to where the base of the tail is. I've never seen a source that looks like that put up for approval.

Holly (Q) ~ For Approval
let there be prickles 07:16, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

Bwahaha it's another cursed image! may you define the earpink a little more in <--- this ear please? I can't really see it. 17:50, November 14, 2014 (UTC)

I doubt it's cursed. I just wanted a different image, as did Jayie. It's not as bad as Frost lmao. Maybe smudge/blur/whatever you do to your shading near the tufts of fur to smooth them out?

re-uploaded aint no way im giving up an oppurtunity for lineart editing 22:26, November 14, 2014 (UTC)