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Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked
Highlights needed to be blurred, but I re-did the shading. OA was Mousetalon with a redo by Oblivion and tweaks by Paleh, Scarlet and Icestorm. 21:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Waste inbetween the legs, m'dear, Fire. 21:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

XD That always happens. Re-Uploaded. 21:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. 01:55 Sat Feb 11

Re-Uploaded. 15:03, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

She's getting a bit gray from the shading. Could you saturate her more? 16:24, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:05, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Her eyes look red? Maybe change it to a more orangy colour? Sky To Kill An Empire  02:47, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

XD I forgot about this. Re-Uploaded. 22:54, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail shading. Sky To Kill An Empire  00:54, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 22:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading consistant in shades. In some places it is dark, in some lighter, blend it all together. 06:34, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

'Re-Uploaded. I tried my best. :/ 21:49, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Waste between the leg and on her back. 00:50, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 01:30, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Q) - Tweaked
I tweaked the color shade to make it darker. Original Artist is Mumble I think, with a minor tweak by Ivy and a tweak/redo by Paleh. What do you think? 23:12, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012

Purdy <3 Lighten the shading a tad. 23:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Looks great and all, but why'd it need to be darkened? She looked dark gray before, and she's not meant to be black.... 04:30, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Because the rogue and loner images didn't match. I added it to the tweak list. Check 'em out yourself. 04:37, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

EDIT: if anything, now it's too dark. Try taking the dodge tool over it once at about...20 %. 04:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Mmm... Not sure about this one. 05:43, Mon, Feb, 13, 2012

I'm only gonna comment and say that the color matches now. Much better, DJ. 05:51, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail and haunch shading. Sky To Kill An Empire  11:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the stomach. -- Elork   13:58, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to disagree Cloudy, but looking at them side by side, this is actually a bit light. Could you darken it, and darken the shading too? 10:32, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  Meh. 06:17, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

Smallear (W) - Tweaked
Ah, tweaking. =D Anyway, it was on the list for shading, so, I just layered some shading overtop of the image, not major or anything. Okay, I think the OA was Snowfeather1 with some help along the way from Night shine. Comments? 02:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and blur them 03:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and chest. Elork  01:48, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid the shading. x.x 02:32, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge, blur, and lighten the earpink. 20:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. 23:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

And thicken it. 15:59, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC)- Tweaked


I think I died while making him....I swear I did....Anyway, had blurred lineart shading was blotchy, needing a crusty/runny nose, and patchy fur, OC was Dawnfeather, With a Tweak from Ivyheart. Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 03:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a missing patch of fur on his shoulder? And blur the earpink a little. 16:31, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, I tried to copy the patchy fur from his elder... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 00:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

But, the linearts are facing opposite directions, Maple. Give it a shot and see what it looks like. 05:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-The friggin' blurred lineart....ugh... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 23:24, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart - fix that. 01:49 Thu Feb 16

Sedgewhisker (A) - Redone
Got permission from Mounty to redo her to match her warrior. OA was Goldenpaw and then redone by Mounty with the new lineart. Comments? 02:18, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the "highlight" on the flank. Lovely as always, Scarlet. 06:50, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste by/on the tail. 21:45, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 02:30, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the haunch and tail lighter parts. Sky To Kill An Empire 03:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  04:07, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Foxleap (Alt. W) - Redone
Finally I can redo him. Ugh, he was probably my least favorite of all my tabbies I've done. Anyways, he needed to be redone cause he was a triangle tabby, needed to be longhaired, and was more light brown than tawny. I got the color from Birchfall's tawny alt, so don't say anything about the color not being right. Not sure who the OA was..... ;D *pokes self* Comments? 10:55, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the shading on the tail. C:  Elork   13:50, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) 06:19, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Brokenstar (D) - Redone
I'm getting sick of his images.... x.x He needed to match his other images. OA was Insane with a tweak by Moonflight. Everything but the tail is from the warrior, so don't comment on that. 10:55, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Waste between the legs :P Other than that........ Wonderful job, Paleh! <3 00:47 Tue Feb 14

Reuploaded - D'oh, forgot that spot. XD Thanks Wildy. 06:19, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Clovertail (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked
That was too difficult to have been a tweak, but I'll call it that anyway. @.@ This alt happened when she was not pregnant or nursing, just staying in the nursery as a perma-queen. (ffff, hate perma-queens) Anyway, transferred Squirrelflight's lineart to this, minus the messed up ear and bushy tail. Comments? 15:11, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

It seems like the tip of her front paw farthest from us is cut off. And my comments on Squirrel's image apply here. 15:22, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Please see my counter-comments on Squirrel's image for why I'm not doing the second half of your request. 15:34, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 21:37, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink less orange? 22:28, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Brightflower (Q) - Redone
Okay, this was on the redo list for the shading, blotchy highlights, and the patches could be more realistic. OA was Mousetalon. Comments? 23:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

<3 this Twi! Just lighten up the white a little. 23:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the patches a little less wildly smeared? It looks a bit strange for a short furred cat. 23:42, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Mudclaw (D) - Redone
Okay, okay, before anyone blows up, I honestly couldn't make this: into something that even resembled this. OA was Insaneuler. Comments? 04:16, February 14, 2012 (UTC)


 * Blows up* Lighten up the shading and brighten the lighter parts a bit. Sky To Kill An Empire 11:25, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly add some more mottles. 01:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded 03:52, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (Q) - Redone
Before you spazz, I got permission from multiple people do redo her. OA was probably Echomist, but I don't think so. It might've just been a file change. 21:58, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the patches a tad, Loonie. I adore this. <3 22:02, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink a tad. *Slowly reaches arm out and steals* Sky To Kill An Empire 22:08, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink some? *dies from awesomeness* 22:11, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks guys ^^ 23:21, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the patches a bit. 01:44 Thu Feb 16

Re-uploaded. 02:49, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle (E) ~ Redone
He was a triangular tabby. I wanted to try a classic tabby so until I get this one approved, I won'tt upload his rogue. OA was Night shine. Comments? 22:05, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look blocky, he needs some stripes at the base of his tai;, on his arms, and on his face, and the color looks off *grumbles* This was gonna be my little secret lol 22:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry for stealing :P It's kinda hard to get the right color because the shading/highlights are super thick. 22:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make him more brown instead of golden, since that's the default tabby color? 18:30, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded  23:40, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the stripes a tad. 01:29, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt. L) - Tweaked
OA was Mintstarr, finished by Dapplecloud33. Since he is golden and therefore ginger, he needed stripes. That is the only thing I have done to this image. 23:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Cute <3 Blur the stripes a tad. 23:28, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? ^^  16:47, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar a little less neon. Shouldn't he have a nick in his ear? ♫Purplemoon♪  I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3  20:15, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Mothwing (MC) ~ Redone
Look up a rippled tabby and this is what you get. Also, the previous version was just a modified triangle tabby. I picked the color off an image of gold, but I might be willing to darken it a bit. I got permission to redo, OA is Hiddensun with tweaks/redos by Mintstarr and Icestorm. Comments? 23:35, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Nice. 8DDD 00:13, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Aww me wanted to do this :P Ah well, define the dapples and the earpink. 00:14, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

So pretty. ^^ Define the shading. 01:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) ~ Redone
Okay, it needed to match it's loner image, and it was pretty much impossible to tweak and get a fine result, so I ended up redoing it with permission. I did redo it, more of a tweak, on the same image, but I'll say it was redone, 'cause that's how it was except on the same image. OA was Iceheart. Comments? 00:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

His muzzle shouldn't be black, and make the earpink a bit more triangular. :P Sky To Kill An Empire 00:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the white on the chest paws and belly. 00:11, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the earpink by any chance? 01:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Spiderfoot (W) ~ Redone
I asked Paleh, and she said it was okay to re-do him. The shading was kinda blotchy and almost not there. The paws needed defining as well. OA is Mousetalon. Since this was reserved before Wild finalized the voting for tweaking, I didn't have to nominate it. 05:47, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W) ~ Redone
This time, Paleh told me I need to redo this image. OA was Icebrain (xD) and...the highlights needed toned down, the shading needed to be redone, and as Mountain pointed out, you couldn't see the lineart. Just to be clear, this is the /black/ alt, not the dark gray. 06:10, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt ~ (Alt.W2) ~ Tweaked
Highlights needed to be toned down. OA = Minstarr. 02:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the head? :3 02:22, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tone the highlights down a bit more ^^ 02:30, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

They're fine, actually, they should possibly be defined. 02:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Billystorm (W) ~ Redone
Woo~ I got him. Needed to be redone 'couse the stripes were just squiggly lines. OA was Dawnleaf. Don't tell me to change the earpink, 'cause that's how it is on a ginger cat. Comments for improvement? 02:25, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

<333 I love this! Lighten the white on the paws a little bit. 02:26, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. I love you Stoney <33333333 02:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lovely. :) Can you make him look a bit more ginger than brown?? 02:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I think the color is fine. The color ginger varies greatly. 02:33, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Just to tell you, ginger isn't orange, it's orange-brownish. Please let changes show... 03:09, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

This is amazing. Can you redden the earpink just a leeetle moar? :3 03:40, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (KM) ~ Redone
Well... I was the OA, and she needed to match her prey hunter. Comments? 04:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

-wait- She needs mud. I'll add that in. 04:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)