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Mudfur (Alt W) ~ For Approval


Very good! The tail tip shouldn't be entirely covered and the mottles are sharper on the alt star. -- 02:44, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Also you should add a little fleck of white in each eye for eye reflections. Looking cute though Fire! Moo (talk) 03:29, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Sure, I'll add the fleck and take some of the stuff off the tail tip. But what do you mean by the mottles being "sharper"? 03:56, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

I think Greenflower means that the mottles need to have a bit less blurry. Have a look at his other alts and especially the starclan alt for a reference. Moo (talk) 06:14, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Woah, nicely done. Could you define the depth in the shading and darken it just a tad? ​​

Thank you! Yep, I get it now, I'll do them all soon, sometime tomorrow morning (Oz time). 06:48, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How does this look? 23:32, August 29, 2019 (UTC)

Better. The nosepink is darker on the other images, and the mottles on the tail tip look more broken up on the alt star. Add more shading to the shoulder and chest, and smooth it out as well. Lastly, define the shading depth (add a thinner, darker layer of shading). -- 00:33, August 30, 2019 (UTC)

on the tail tip, there shouldnt be any lighter mottles, as well as the mottles in general need to be smaller and more spanned out. 01:34, 8/30/2019

also adding on, sorry, but the mottles need to be sharper still. They're a lil too blurry 01:34, 8/30/2019

Still working? 14:39, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They lost their drawing pen. I believe it is Vec who gave them an extension Moo (talk) 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reed Tail (W) ~ CBA
i'll fix the stripes later, just realized they don't look the same as the other images

I see some waste along the tail, near the bend and where it touches the ground. -- 16:28, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

Also smooth out the shading on the face --Moo (talk) 21:03, August 31, 2019 (UTC)

re-up Can the both of you point out where you're talking about? im a bit confused

There's also a thin line of waste underneath the tail. 23:35, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

re-up

CBA? 14:34, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Featherpelt (K) - For Approval
Let's give a tabby a shot rip Moo (talk) 02:32, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Define/expand the shading and smudge the stripes more. -- 02:33, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:43, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

the shading on her face seems a lil flat. 05:09, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''I have no idea how to fix flat shading but I tried and also fixed some leaking Moo (talk) 08:44, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

A kinda easy way is to add another layer of shading that covers only a small area of the first layer of shading to create a sense of depth (kinda like on Doestar's kit)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 07:13, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Thin the stripe on the very tail tip; just seems thicker than the other images. The stripes on the haunch also seem a touch to sharp; looks great though

reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:03, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sasha (W) - For Approval
i hate this. it's horrible as heck. 05:42, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Can you remove the shading over the eyes, Smudge the tail a bit more smoothly, and lighten the shading? Thanks! Moo (talk) 08:35, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading while you're at it, too. -- 15:08, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 17:40, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Define the shading depth on the front legs, and smooth the shading more. -- 17:46, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 18:57, September 1, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading, and erase it on the eye. -- 18:59, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

And can you smudge the earpink and brown a bit more? Moo (talk) 21:20, September 1, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. gimme a sec, and the eye shading will be gone. 06:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

'''look at them eyes. reuploaded. 06:27, September 2, 2019 (UTC)'''

Lighten the shading more --Moo (talk) 04:23, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

'''reuploaded. 04:31, September 3, 2019 (UTC)'''

The base colour looks too "cool" compared to her other images; maybe try #C59A70 for the base? Or even giving the shading a red tint, though that is completely artist's choice

'''reuploaded. tell me if should change the shading tint. 00:14, September 4, 2019 (UTC)'''

The brown and earpink appear too dark compared with her other images. 14:41, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the haunch shading a touch; just so it curves a little more to the shape of the haunch since rn it just covers most of it

'''reuploaded. 00:53, September 6, 2019 (UTC)'''

Sorreltail (W) ~ For Approval
My child! She wasn't on the characters needing art, but when I looked at the OAs, her OA was Icy, who has now left this wiki, so I thought it should be OK. You can decline this if it breaks the rules. I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 16:24, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede/smooth the shading some. -- 16:30, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 17:22, September 2, 2019 (UTC)

Recede the shading more on the tail white^

reuploaded I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ I love my child​ 16:48, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

The shading is leaking a tiny bit on the tail, plus I think it could be smoothed some. -- 23:07, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Briarlight (Star) - CBA
First ever StarClan cat. And I'm glad she can run free like she always dreamed of. -- 00:28, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

I think the shading on the forelegs would be switched if the light source is going ---> 01:40, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:04, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:35, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sunrise (Ro) ~ CBA
All colors except the eyes and the pale belly came directly from Tree's images. Comments? 00:29, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

She needs to be long-furred, new cite for that was found.

02:08, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 02:30, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Could you possibly smudge the paler parts just a tiny bit?

Reuploaded. 17:30, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:42, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sneezecloud (W) ~ CBA


There's a line of waste underneath the tail. -- 03:08, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded

CBA?

Sasha (K) - For Approval
My favorite part about this one: Making the collar. -- 23:16, September 3, 2019 (UTC)

Both ears are supposed to be brown, I think. 00:35, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

I believe this only affects the outer part of the ear, not the inner? Just in case, could I get a second opinion on that? -- 00:37, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

eh I think the inner ear would matter too

I also think the collar tag would be on the other side; right now it looks like it's not abiding by the laws of gravity. Or it's stuck upright or something. 15:34, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- 22:16, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

The brown tail/ears in her other images look lighter + warmer than the colour you've got here

Reuploaded -- 22:34, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Stonefur (Alt. W) ~ CBA
Was going to do the kit alt, but realized that the only description mistake he had listed was from when he was a warrior. Comments? 04:26, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink Moo (talk) 20:32, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 20:35, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:35, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Sootfur (Alt. W) ~ CBA
Comments? 04:26, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

CBA? 14:35, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Softpelt (K) - For Approval
Here I think the shading needs smoothing but I wanna get this in quickly so I remember Moo (talk) 05:47, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading. 06:10, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit too, while you're at it. ​​​​​​

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 02:25, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading more, I'd use a #737373 color tint. 04:46, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

If you need the files from the other images, feel free to let me know, I've got the app and warrior. It is a solid though, so you could do well without it either way

Ok thank you Spooky Moo (talk) 23:52, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 00:10, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. -- 00:12, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded Moo (talk) 00:15, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

a wee bit more? 00:56, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Reuploaded No more. I think it might even be too dark right now Moo (talk) 04:04, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Creek (ki) - For Approval
21:40, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

I didn't realize he was a kit, will fix that later. 21:49, September 4, 2019 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:58, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Scorchwind (K) ~ CBA
01:16, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Sharpclaw (SkC) (W) ~ CBA
sharp boi 01:16, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

CBA?

Stormfur (W) - For Approval


Could you lighten the shading just barely? Just the smallest smidge; it looks black where it is rn, so just to the point where it isn't almost bicolor if you get what I mean

reuploaded

Snowbird (W) ~ For Approval
I tried a new light source so go on easy on me lol

17:40, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Some shading leaking along the chest and add some more shading to the > forleg. 18:21, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

19:14, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Make the nose pink to match the rogue and smoothen out the shading on the back leg. 19:54, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

20:51, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

expand the haunch shading. 00:57, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and it's also leaking in several places on the tail. -- 01:00, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

01:58, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Sparrowtail (W) ~ For Approval
I can't do tabbies

17:40, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think the other images have a paler muzzle and chest? And a dark tail-tip. 18:20, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded

19:14, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? And the stripes appear darker on the other images. 19:54, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded I colorpicked the stripe color from the loner, so it should be decent now. If not I'll just darken the color of the stripes.

21:09, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

I feel as if the legs could use a tiny bit of shading depth. -- 23:06, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

reuploaded 00:07, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Ghost) - For Approval
i tried. modeled most of her pattern off her deputy image 18:29, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

wait, what about Jose's blank? 00:43, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Squirrelflight didn't stay in an unknown residence because she didn't die, so she'd get the ghost blank. -- 00:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Moon (K) - For Approval
moon child  18:50, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, so, since the Sisters are said to be pretty much all long-furred (this is something that stands out to Squirrelflight and is noted pretty heavily), could you possibly make this into a long-furred kit? Given Moon is Moonlight's kit, and this is a prominent thing, I think it should be depicted on her kits as well. ​​​​​​

Her father's pelt length is unknown and long fur is a recessive gene, so I thought it'd be find here since the long-haired mention is about the Sisters before she and her littermates are born, but I guess I can change it 19:03, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Yeah, but this is something that's pointed out for every cat in this group. Regardless of who the father might be, and given the Erins don't care about genetics, I'm not sure we can appropriately use that. ​​​

reup 23:01, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Spiderleg (K) ~ For Approval
ah the stinky boi i love 20:37, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Add a little bit of brown to his belly Moo (talk) 21:36, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Define the shading depth some. -- 23:05, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded! It's kinda hard to show the brown without adding too much.. 23:56, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

I feel you. There is also some leaking sharing above the tail on the haunch. It's light not dark Moo (talk) 00:17, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Blade (KP) - For Approval
this was so much fun; matched to david's ghost vers.

Tom (Unknown) ~ For Approval
22:31, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Scorchfur (W) - For Approval
22:43, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Seedpaw (K) - For Approval
-- 23:04, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

I think the eyes should be a bit more blue because they look completely white Moo (talk) 23:49, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

They don't look that white to me? -- 23:51, September 5, 2019 (UTC)

Idk I just know it doesn't look blue at all to me? Moo (talk) 00:16, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

It's cool, maybe your screen is acting up. It happens sometimes. -- 00:18, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Snow (Sister) (Ro) ~ For Approval
I really can't shade white cats lol

00:44, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Expand the shading, smooth it out, and there's some waste under the tail, belly, and chest. -- 00:45, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Add shading to her face and ears. 00:59, September 6, 2019 (UTC)

Moonlight (Ghost) - For Approval
01:27, September 6, 2019 (UTC)Tybaxel