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Mudfur (MCA) ~ Tweaked
OA was Stoneclaw33, tweaked by Dapplecloud33, redone by Snowdazzle, and tweaked again by Ivystripe. (I think . . . stuff can get confusing) Tweaked to remove pale muzzle and chest.

Add some mottling where you removed the pale parts. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 19:17, January 15, 2018 (UTC)

Could you make the mottles look more like mottles? Right now, it seems more like a fur texture, and I know Applefur was recently tweaked for the same kind of thing.

re-up may reupload cause this is ugly

it's not ugly. It just blends in with the shading a bit. maybe try changing the layer settings?

re-up Still not satisfied; had to fiddle around with saturation and darkness and opacity (because if I set it on multiply it becomes dark chestnut)

As I've said on the other images, if redoing this would be easier for you, you have my permission to do so. Trying to tweak this along with what I commented with would be fairly tricky, given how these images were shaded. You just have to keep the same colors and whatnot.

re-up Ahahaha what has school done to me

Maybe expand the shading on the hindleg closest to us? And define it on both paws furthest. 01:46, January 24, 2018 (UTC)

I think you could smooth the mottles out a little.

Mudfur (Star) ~ Redone
Same as above. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 04:34, January 20, 2018 (UTC)

Try smudging the mottles a bit more to match the MC? (not sure if you have to do that though, but I think it might look better regardless)

'''Re-uploaded. ''' C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 21:01, January 22, 2018 (UTC)

The mottles on the kit are a bit darker i believe, they are also a bit more spaced out than on this i think? not sure how to explain, same goes for above 01:50, January 24, 2018 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Alt W) ~ Tweaked
I'm going to try and fix that tail shading. 00:33, 1/25/2018 Can you make the ginger patch a little darker to match the other patches? (Unless it's just shading throwing it off) and maybe smooth it out a little more

Extend the pattern a lot. You can only see a small part of the white on the base and top part of the tail.

Lilyheart (Alt Q) ~ Tweaked
was this what I was supposed to do?

You can really only see a small bit of white on the base and tip of the tail. I think the tortie pattern itself should be extended a bit more.

Re-uploaded is this what you meant?

Mudfur (A) ~ Redone
OA was Berry. 14:27, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere and expand it slightly? Also maybe add some to the belly? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 02:51, January 26, 2018 (UTC)


 * Adding onto my comment- there is some waste by the tail tip. I also think the earpink on <-- ear is leaking into the brown fur color itself. C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 02:53, January 26, 2018 (UTC)

Mudfur (W) ~ Redone
OA was Moonflight, then Snowed and Stoneclaw. Preettty sure I need to smooth out the patches. Or make them smaller. 14:27, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

Yeah, I think you should do those. You could also lighten them slightly

Whorlpaw (ki) - Redone
14:39, January 25, 2018 (UTC)

I love this design. Could you define the shading everywhere? C o s m o s n e s s 🐾 #team litten 18:12, January 25, 2018 (UTC)