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Willowpelt (Q) - Tweaked
OA was Bramble. I re-did the shading, and the eye color didn't look like her warrior one, so I made them more alike. Comments? 23:43, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

I know you didn't tweak the earpink, but can you blur it please? Nice work on the shading. 23:49, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I forgot to thank/mention Atelda for teaching me how to redo the shading. :3 23:52, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 99.89.95.201 00:02, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - ^_^ 00:11, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me up there. xD 00:12, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the non-shaded part on the belly over the the left and brighten the earpink. 02:16 Sun Nov 27

Re-Uploaded 05:58, November 27, 2011 (UTC)

And make that highlight bigger - 02:22, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded 20:55, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

The stomach highlight should be darker, or brighten the others to match. 22:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - No more hightlights. I also re-did my shading. 05:09, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lilystar (L) - Tweaked
Ehm, hello? Its me agin, I tweaked Lilystar, blurred hightlinks and darkened shadings..hmm it looks a little like redoned shadings o_O Oh and Darkhallows is OA 18:40,November 28,2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the haunch and neck shading a lot, and possibly tone down the eyes. 20:41, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste near the end of the haunch and white pixels on the tail, paws, and on the left side of the cat. 00:23, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, reuploaded 10:11,November 29,2011 (UTC)

Erase the smudged lineart on the haunch. 02:04 Wed Nov 30

Its not smudged but i made somethig different, i think now it isnt looking like it 07:15,November 30,2011 (UTC)

Nah it still looks a little weird. And it is smudged, even though I know it wasn't you who smudged it. It's "part of the blank" but it's not supposed to be. Erase it and smudge the pelt into the earpink. 03:50 Thu Dec 1

Lighten the paw shading it's darker than the rest. 12:10 Thu Dec 1

Smudged lineart..huuf im blind my friends! :-) Reuploaded 09:26,December 2,2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q) ~ Redone
OA was Nightshine; redone to match her other images. 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten the stripes a tad and blur them? 00:42, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Done. 00:50, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and blur the shading on the belly. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 01:01, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:05, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh darn, I was kinda hoping to do this one. Oh well I've got plenty of images on my to-do list. XD Anyways, great job! Lighten and desaturate the whole image just a bit though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕  ☆StarClan be with you★  01:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. 01:14, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's this big patch of yellow waste near her tail, so erase that. xD 02:40, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and there's patches of yellow waste on her head, above our far front leg, and along her back. 02:41, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the eyes, they look brown like the pelt :3 02:58, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes lighter still. 03:31 Wed Nov 30

Re-Uploaded. 23:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Fritz (KP) ~ Redone
OA is Moonpelt1786, and I got permission via IRC from Iceheart to redo this. I must say, he looks smexy. <3 05:11, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

He does look smexy. :3 Define the shading. 05:37, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Does the darker shading look better, or, should I stick with the lighter? 05:44, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should stick with the darker shading. Make the nose a darker pink, it looks odd standing out like that. 23:30, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 23:33, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes look purple. :3 00:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the white part of the eye should be on the other side of his pupil. 00:18, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not changing how the eyes are, Oblivion. Every user has their own style. I did change the color though. Re-uploaded. 00:27, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And I respect that. However, because the light source is coming from the left, the white in his eye should be on the left as well. 00:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And that's where you're wrong. I do not have a light source. ;) 00:39, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

...yes you do. Since the shading is very clearly on the right side, it's coming from the left. You can't not have a light source. Light has to be coming from somewhere, unless it was pitch black, in which case you wouldn't be able to see him anyway. 00:44, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

No, I do not. All I do is trace the lineart with black, and blur it. There is no light source. Trust me, I know what I'm talking about. 00:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's a flipping pixil, don't worry about it. 07:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Bird (e) ~ Redone
Redone to match other images. OA was Mintstarr. Comments? 21:28, November 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Define the tail shading? 04:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 18:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lionheart (D) - Tweaked
OA was Icecloud33. He needed thicker fur around his neck. 00:38, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you extend the bottom tip on the ruff down to match his warrior image? 02:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 05:41, Thu, Dec, 1, 2011

It wasn't on the tweak list for shading, DJ. 17:57, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:57, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Even though it wasn't on the list, DJ can still comment on it, Shelly :3 although I do agree that the shading looks fine as it is. Blur the earpink a tad. 02:19 Fri Dec 2

Re-uploaded. 02:42, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Jingo (Lo) - Tweaked
I think that this should be redone, but it needed to be more brown as it was looking a bit greenish. Original artist is Darkhallows. D= 01:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink tad. 01:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the eye colour. I don't think it should be redone, but mainly because I like the stripes. ^-^ 01:46, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

The chin looks like it has some blurred lines. Also, the missing tail-tip looks like the lines are sort of thin, could you thicken it by about one pixil? I've always liked her, she looks like my Hickory only shorthaired :3 02:18, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It you want to redo it, why not? Just keep the same pattern, because I'm quite fond of it. xD 03:20, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. What Cloudy said ^^ 03:29 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded. o.o 02:07, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Move the unshaded part on her haunch down to cover part of her leg, as well as what it's covering now. 02:14 Fri Dec 2

Reuploaded. Heh....:{ 02:42, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (w) - Tweak
OA was Mistystar & the white needed to be smudged, but I couldnt get it to look like the patches so I smudged everything. - 03:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and darken the shading. 03:29 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded.- 03:36, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken it a bit more? 03:37 Thu Dec 1

Reuploaded - 03:43, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, the original artist was Shadowedheart, then redone by Mistystar. Blur the earpink. 18:04, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

And redden it a tad as well :P 21:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brambleberry (MC) - Tweak
OA was Echomist, her shading was very light and needed blurred. I just went ahead and redid the shading. The spots look almost kind of gray to me, but meh...didn't mess with them. It also had a minor transparency issue, colored lineart, and I added depth to the eye. I <3 Brambleberry so much, she's my favorite character! Comments for improvement? 04:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink, thicken the shading on the tail and forelegs; it also looks like her right foreleg has no shading but that just may be my terrible eyesight... I <3 Brambleberry too :) - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I went ahead and just redid the earpink. I am her self-appointed biggest fangirl :P  04:27, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Goosefeather (MC) - Redone
I honestly don't know why this was even considered for a mere tweak. This image has been bugging me for a while. I am a lead, I can decide if an image needs tweaked or redone, so don't start anything. The speckles/spots looked very little like his elder image. Also, the image had shading issues. I noticed that in his description he has frazzled whiskers, ragged ears, and shaggy paws, so I felt those needed to be added as well. OA was Flamingomom3. One last thing, I felt the orangish-brownish herb adds a nice touch based on his character, so I refuse to make it green like the other's. Comments for improvement? 07:08, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pwetty! Mak ethe ear-pink a bit smaller and blur it. :3 12:16 Thu Dec 1

Well, since it says he needed shaggy paws, could you add some fur sticking out from his paws and not just his ankle joints? 12:33, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It did look kinda funky to me anyway  16:53, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno... it may just be me, but I think it'd fit better with a long-haired blank. I think the fuzzy feet look out of place on a short-haired blank. Just my opinion, of course. 17:56, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

That's kind of what I thought too, but I didn't want the elder to have to be redone too if we can help it, ya know? But I do agree  18:01, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

It wouldn't be a difficult redo to tweak the elder image as well to be long haired... I'd do it for you, but I've already got two images up. I don't think there would be any objections. :\ 18:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, why not make it long haired? Shelly's got a good point, when it comes to the fuzzy feet. I think he's probably got shaggy fur in general, but we only know about the paws. xD 18:32, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Moony pointed that out to me on his talk page. I think it helps with his 'insane/crazy' look xD But, maybe make him long-haired, I could do his elder image. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 23:15, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

If you don't wanna turn him into a longhair, I'd just suggest making the tufts a bit shorter. Define the shading on the tail. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:07, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Snowdrop (KP) - Redone
You wouldn't believe what program I used to make this. I have permission, original artist was Icecloud, and the shading needed to be thickened and blurred, and there was blurred lineart. Comments?

She should be lighter; right now she looks pale grey. 21:41, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just noticed I forgot to sign. I used Pixlr to make this. 21:45, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Still too grey. 22:02, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded If I lighten it any more, the shading would be too light, and I darkened the shading. 22:26, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink; its too desaturated. 23:03, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded 23:19, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

If you won't lighten the image (I still think you should) then enlarge the shoulder and face "highlights". 02:11 Fri Dec 2

Reuploaded No obligation for the quotations, I won't annex the urge to be belligerent. 2:40am Fri Dec.2/11

Violet (Ki) - Tweaked
I made it lighter and there was miscolored lineart so I got rid of that. OA was ~Rainwhisper~. Comments? 22:14, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Moss that Grows by River (CG)~ Redone
The mud needed to be redone, and the more i worked it with the more anoying and pink-looking the image got, so i ended up redoing it. OA was Echomist. 00:02, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a bit bigger and blur it. 01:22 Fri Dec 2

Reuploaded- 01:50, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (W) - Tweaked
OA was Night shine, tweaked by Skystar. He needed to be longhaired, and oh my gosh, fail on those tail stripes ._. 01:13, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

No, I mean, look at the stripes I tweaked. Blargh. Anyway, the earpink looks like it sorta pixelated, anyway you can fix that? (I know its not on the list) Hey Shelly.... <font face="Maiandra GD" size="2" color="blue">Penguiuuuiiinnn..... 01:35, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. 01:43, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the stripe on his foreheaad? Like is on his kit? If we went with it this way the stripe would be OVER his eyes, and that would just be WERID...... Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I redid the earpink xD 02:39, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Briarlight (Ki) ~ Tweak
Solid colored cats are boring. :P But Briarlight is one of my favorites, so I had to do her. ^-^ Anyways, I kind of tweaked it. The color had to be changed to match the other images and shading needed to be redone. Also, the earpink was a different color. So, I don't really know what to call it... 01:20, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

OA? And it's pretty! Blur the center of the left ear-pink it looks like a couple solid pixils. <span style="">01:25 Fri Dec 2

Earpink is fine. -- 01:42, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ Tweaked
OA was Blizzardpelt, tweaked by Splashpelt, needed to be lightened, comments? 01:41, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a tad. ^-^  02:25, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Rockshade (W) ~Redone


Okay, before y'all lose your minds, Oblivion gave me premission to de ro him, becuase everytime i re-did him, he looked like barf, and if i lightend his color, THAT color would become his lineart color, and it annoyed me, so, i asked to re-do him, and, got this, i know he looks dark-gray, but this is version one of him, and if anyone wants to see version two, just comment, and i'll up load version two. Now then, Comments? (PLEASE ask for version two, i hate this one >.>) Maple♥  pool  Mischief brewing 02:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah, OA was TottalyTawnypelt, and was then taken over by Frostheart <3, and the highlights and shading was blotchy, and he needed a small, stupmy tail. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:21, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, i went with version number two, 'cause, i hated how the first one looked >.> I like this one, MUCH better....so.....please comment. Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:36, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur that shading tons. Thicken it as well. 02:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, a comment! Reuploaded, comments? Maple♥ pool  Mischief brewing 02:52, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the shading on the back, make the highlight smaller, and smooth out the shading; it looks really streaky and botchy. - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 04:05, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Purdy (KP) - Redone
OA was Insane. The old colors didn't match and the pattern looked all smudgy. Comments? - Scarletwind  ✧ L i s a n n a ✧ 05:12, December 2, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, I don't think he would be all scraggly and torn like that when he was a kittypet, he probably got the tears and scars when he was a loner  05:14, December 2, 2011 (UTC)