Warriors Wiki talk:Charart



Nettlepaw (A) - For Approval
My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? -- ♥Shine star♥  23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be more of a reddish color--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? -- ♥Shine star♥  00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. -- Tinsel claw  00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! -- ♥Shine star♥  14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? -- ♥Shine star♥  14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ -- ♥Shine star♥  15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --Silverbells Merry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? -- ♥Shine star♥  22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Here. Try re-doing him again. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? -- ♥Shine star♥  19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar ♥Shine ]] star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. :D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. Tinselfern Have yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

oh my star clan! i am soo annoyed! i can't find my nettlepaw file on my computer! -- ♥Shine star♥  21:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Did you try a search? -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:33, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

ya -- ♥Shine star♥  17:56, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Can't you just copy and paste the image from here?-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 18:10, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Uhh...you could just save the image to your computer again. (i think that's what Ashshadow meant.) -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:16, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah it is sorry I wasn't clear.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:21, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I tried doing that but it comes out all blurry! -- ♥Shine star♥  15:58, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry but it sounds like you'll have to start over.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 17:14, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, I'm already trying, just give me a little while to get a new one -- ♥Shine star♥  15:12, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, heres my new nettlepaw, now he needs more work but at least i have something to work WITH. Comments? -- ♥Shine star♥  15:56, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the eye like on my tutorials, and add shading, if it's there I can't see it. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 16:51, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, i'll get on that soon, my big sis is on the desktop right now. and also, on this computer the tabby stripes look all bad, and icethroat, do you think i should redo my tabby stripes the way it says so on your tutorials, or the way it is already? and it sort of confuses me on the eye thing on your tutorials. -- ♥Shine star♥  00:19, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

please work on this or it will be declined--Echopaw 01:21, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw what are you talking about it was just updated.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 01:30, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

No, your stripes are fine! I'm not very good at those type of stripes, so I didn't bother making a tutorial for them, that's all. and the eye thing, each block is like a pixel, if that helps any. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 02:03, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, i'll get on it soon, its just that i'm at my cousins for New Years and i'm sleeping over there so my work is on my computer at home. I'll get back on him soon though! -- ♥Shine star♥  16:23, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Also, ice, when i do my new shading, (cause mine you CANNOT see) should i just do it over the tabby stripes or remove them, shade, then put them back on? -- ♥Shine star♥  16:35, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Go over the tabby stripes. The shading should be on both the stripes and the fur. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 18:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

ya, i'm working on it, its just really hard for me to do the eyes! i'll have a new one up soon though! promise! -- ♥Shine star♥  17:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I am SO sorry i haven't been on! i just keep getting BOATLOADS of homework! and we have a science project, but i promise to work on him when i have time! (and i have sewing and CDD and science club, and well you get the point) SO sorry! -- ♥Shine star♥  12:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ryewhisker (W) - For Approval
My first tabby. I did the best I could. I really want this approved by Christmas. Please! Comments before Christmas? --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:28, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe more shading and some more stripes.-- Darkhallows 12:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink more, add more shading and blend, darken the tabby sttipes, and add more tabby stripes. Also, make them a little more wavy and not strait y's.--Minnowclaw 17:55, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Wait I am too lazy to put the Reuploaded sign up. Wait I just did! --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks messy. Blur it and add highlights to the head and tail.-- :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! |undefined 01:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Try adding some tabby stripes to the face, and make them less of a pattern of Ys but soe squggly lines, some Ys, and some little dashes in between the lines.-- MossScrooge Bahumbug!  20:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Um I don't get what your saying. Help? -- Pan dast orm Panda Love 21:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Icestorm, she means that the stripes are shaped liked 'Y's. Add a line in between some of them and make them smaller. Maplefern Hi!14:09, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whole image re-done. I also tried a diffrent style of shading. Any more comments? --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:13, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I would probably blur the shading a little more, and make the stripes a little longer. Also, add some stripes to the legs. But other than that, it looks great!--Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:34, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Do I really have to? I was thinking of adding some lines and I kinda like it how it is now. --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:43, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Which do you guys like better? --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:46, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I like the one on the right better. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:13, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

The one on the right is better. All I can say is tone down the ear pink a little bit, blend the corners of it, and maybe add a little more shading? Should be good to go, then. (: -- Quiet !... 08:15, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

So the one on teh right? Tell me if the changes didn't show up. Oh and Quietstep can you reply to my friend requst? Thanks! I don't think the changes showed up.--:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 18:44, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

The right one although the ear pink needs blurring (which, if done right, should dull the colour a little too as it will mix in with the brown), the stripes look very blotchy and blurred. Perhaps make them a solid colour and more defined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:49, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Can you tell me how to fix them? --:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tell me if the changes didn't show. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:13, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading more but be careful not to hit the stripes. Also - the ear pink needs to be more like Swallowtail (RC) or Lionheart or Weaselfur Sa  nd  y!  22:52, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Which one do you like better? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:57, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 02:39, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

To be honest, I liked the best, but out of these two, I like the stripes on the one on the right, but I like the color on the one on the left better. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 04:12, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat. Try darkening the second one, as well as blurring the ear pink and the general pelt. It looks pretty good. -- Bramble -sama  18:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anymore comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 02:29, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes darker. Also, there's some extra lineart on the ear and the top of the head. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 18:09, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Can you get rid of it? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 18:15, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the stripes. Give me a sec to upload it. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 18:19, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 03:52, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the ear pink a little. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 16:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 17:15, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? I need this approved! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 18:52, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add a couple of stripes to the head and paws, and add shading to the midriff. Also, it was only an hour and a half between your two comments, people will comment whenever they can get on. --  Icy -chan  20:05, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

There is some blurred lineart around the eye Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  16:33, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Sorry Icethroat my calender on my computer was broken. The time too. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 13:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little too bright, after that this should be ready.-- Darkhallows 22:27, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Millie(Q)- For approval
-- ok since whitewing is approved i thought i'd put up Millie. she is my first tabby! and i am quite proud of her. comments? <font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

Looks good. The thing is, The stripes should be thinner --Rainstripe c: 16:33, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, discounting the 3 discussion sections this just fits nto 35 images. The stripes need to be less cartoony; look at some aproved tabbies for reference. There are a few different styles you can try. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ears are too dark and need blurring. Sandy's right. The tabby markings are too thick, and could do with more blurring. --Birchy (I don't know how to get a signature!!)

The tabby stripes need to look more like Millie's stripes on her warrior image. -- Silversnow Icethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, the ear pink needs blurred, and fix the color; make it more like the color in Millie's warrior image. You don't need ear pink on the ear farthest from us (the left ear), so get rid of that. You need to make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image, and then blur the stripes. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 15:38, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image,please.Blur the ear pink,fix color,like her warrior image.Delete the farthest ear pink,it's not needed.I can see your proud to,everyone is for there first's of anything!-- '''FirePelt  02:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

ok with these comments i will redo her completely. she should be reuploaded in around 2 days,<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!

This needs to be worked on or it will have to be declined. Also, please sign with ~ so the timestamp will be displayed. Thanks Sa  nd  y!  14:14, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploadedeven more proud!--<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas!  17:43, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look much better but they're to dark. Lighten them some.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 01:25, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

how do i liten the stripes without lightning the pic?--<font color="Red" style="background:lime">Santamoon <font color="Red" style="background:Lime">Merry Christmas! 17:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Change the size of the brush on the dodge tool. --  Icy -chan  22:22, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool- For Approval
my second charart...comments??-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  10:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


 * it needs more shading, all the tail is a good thing to do and the ear with out the earpink on it can have shading on it to, other then that for now I can't see any thing else. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 10:34, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


 * Is this charart leafpool? Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 11:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This doesn't look much like her Medicine cat version Icecloud33 13:41, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Try to smudge and blur the tabby markings to make them look more natural. Otherwise, it's good! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 17:55, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Try to make it more of a sandy brown, as she probally got her fur color from Sandstorm. Make the chest white go up to her face, like in Leafpool's medicine cat image. The eyes also seem to be going off the lineart a bit. -- Snow star <font color="Lime">Leaf-bare <font color="Red">is here! 20:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  08:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the color is much better. But I still have a few things

1. The stripes on her back need to be connected to her back in some way

2. The stripes need to be blurred more

3. The white on her chest is still way to big

4. The white on her chest needs to stretch up to her face

5. The white on her paws should be smudged into her pelt and then blurred

Here's something you should do. Save Leafpool's approved medicine cat image, and then bring it up in your art program along with your image. That way you can make it as close as possible--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  12:05, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The pelt doesn't match Leafpool's medicine cat image. And the eye is freaking me out. Try looking at Stoneclaw on how to do the eye. Also she needs ear-pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:09, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:08, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Make it more like this:And the eplt dosent look like her medicine cat version. . '''FirePelt 16:09, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, it's getting better. But the color still isn't quite right. Try running the dogde tool over the entire image a couple of times, that ought to help. And the stripes are getting better too, but they look kinda sloppy--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I'd like to note that the thumb near the bottom is from Fire, not Ivy. :x -- Quiet !...  04:26, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I saved her medicine cat pic on my computer and erased the herbs,and I tried to put her chin on.You can tell.I put it on to show her what the pelt color is,where the white comes,and the tabby strpes. '''FirePelt 20:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

i'm proud of this one for sure!!!reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:43, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Her tabby stripes are too dark, sorry.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 18:06, December 29, 2009 (UTC)


 * The tabby markings are darker than the ones on the medicine cat image. The ear pinks are different too. Blend in the area where the white fur touches her tabby fur. Plus add some shading.<span style="font-family:Segoe Script; background:navy; color:silver; border: 2px dashed silver; -moz-border-radius: 1em; color: silver">Shimmerpool 2010 on its way! :D

this is better reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  06:24, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be blurred. And the tabby markings look a little dark -- '''Icecloud33 16:10, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Her eye looks a little squished to me.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  19:05, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

i used color dropper.reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  03:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The color of the stripes is better, but they need to be blurred into the pelt. And also, Moss is right about the eye. Look on one of Icethroat's tutorials for help on the eye--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:44, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

thanks!! reuploaded-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:01, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Still, the eye is freaking me out. Look at Brambleberry or Whitestorm or Stoneclaw on how to do the eye. Also darken ear pink. There's something about the stripes that's borthering me. I don't know what it is. But I will tell you when I've figured it out. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 03:05, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

reuploded-- *Ivy  spring!!*  03:16, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

REPLOADED-- *Ivy  spring!!*  07:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ivypool, please fix the eye like many users have said. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED-- *Ivy  spring!!*  04:03, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but the eye still looks nothing like the one on her warrior image, or any of the cats that Icestorm suggested for reference. Also, you need to blur the white way more, you need to lighten and blur the ear pink, darken the shading a little, and blur the stripes some more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 05:13, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded...-- *Ivy  spring!!*  05:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but it needs to be a tad darker. Try uploading the med cat image with it to get the eye color.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 02:32, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded!!-- *Ivy  spring!!*  03:07, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

This looks almost ready =) All I can see is that the edges of the white where it meets the brown, the ear pink and the tabby stripes need a slight blurring. Go easy on the stripes though =) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  19:22, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuopiadedthanks for the good comment,sandy!!-- *Ivy  pool~*  03:56, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ivy, for the last time, fix the eye. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 17:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

There is nothing wrong with the eye, I'm sorry. This is exactly the same eye style I use on every one of my warrior, deputy and med cat chararts and it has never been a problem. I think Icy may actually have this eye style on her tutorial; I know I'm not the only one to use it. I've checked it in large and it's fine. The problem is that her eyes are yellow/amber which sometimes makes the pupil stand out too much and the highlight difficult to be seen. I don't really think it's fixable though Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  20:50, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's the style I use. It's missing a couple of black pixels though, probably from where the white belly line was made. That's probably what's making it like it isn't fixed, so the black pixels need added back in. --  Icy -chan  21:55, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, I don't think Bluestar means the pupil. (I don't mean to put words in your mouth Blue) I think it's the lineart. If you look at her warrior image, it just looks different. It's mainly the bottom part of the eye. Maybe there's som lineart missing?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:19, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't make myself clear; the black pixels I was talking about were the missing lineart. Thanks for clearing that up for me, Nightfall. --  Icy -chan  01:57, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

what??should i fixit or not??@@--<span style="font-family:Papyrus; *Ivy 03:28, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

no idea what your ssaying,but i checked the eye..-- *Ivy  pool~*  03:37, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay the eye is much better! But, the white on her paws and chest look too gray. Run the dodge tool over it some and then this should probably be ready!-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:40, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! |undefined 11:11, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  11:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Molepelt (MC) For Approval
Did I go over the image limit? If I did, feel free to remove. I just did this for fun. Still waiting for comments on Ryewhisker. Anyways how is he? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:lime; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Jinglestorm ♥ 'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:58, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Neat! I really like it. Maybe make the medicine stuff in his mouth a darker green, so it looks more natural. Otherwise, it's awesome! --<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS; background:crimson; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">CandyCaneWolf 23:15, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I love it Icy! But I think you should probably blur the shading and highlights some, especially around the neck. But it's awesome!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:32, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

His ear pink seems to be a bit too bright - the shade is right, its just light. Highlights would make it seem like there's more shading, and the herbs would look better if all three were different shades(don't forget to shade them, too!). -- Quiet !... 08:08, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I had actually reserved him, but you keep this up; I still haven't got around to doing him anyways, haha. Also, merry Christmas! Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 18:07, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

This is awsome! Darken and blur earpink and it should be good! Merry Christmas! 18:23, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with maple,darken and blur the ear pink. '''FirePelt 14:28, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Okay for some reason I can't get to pixlr.com. I'll try to get to this as soon as I can. Please don't decline! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whole image re done. Why you ask? I just wanted to! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 21:37, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

LOL! Okay, I think you should probably blur the shading a little more, and the ear pink looks a little too bright. Try and darken it some--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 03:03, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the midriff, like on Bluestar's deputy image, or like on Molewhisker and Silvermask. Also, darken all of the shading. --  Icy -chan  16:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little too bright also - try a Rippletail, Whitethroat, or other darker coloured cat reference like Dustpelt or Swallowtail (RC) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  16:38, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  11:49, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I keep uploading it but it won't show up! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 21:28, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, here's what to do. Upload your new version under the file name Molepelt.medcat.png and then mark your current file with the tag. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  21:43, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I try uploading the new file but it says "Error" and I cant remember the other part. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 21:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Jay's Wing (TB) - For Approval


Ok, so Lionheart used to be here, but I gave up on him so here's Jay's Wing as a to-be! I'm pretty proud of him, if I do say so myself! Comments? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:35, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, my comment is first to say that you shouldn't just delete sections and replace them. If you want to give up on an image, withdraw it and create a separate section for your new image... Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  19:11, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

As for the image, the shading needs thickening and blurred Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  19:14, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy, but I had had Lionheart withdrawn for several days and Bramble or you never moved it to the declined section, so I put Jay's Wing up here so I wouldn't have to wait until more images were approved. I'll fix the shading in a moment. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:17, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thickened and blurred shading. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:25, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, just for future reference =) Sorry for missing it. This looks good, but the ear pink looks too bright - make it more like Tornear or Rippletail Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  09:39, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, I hate picking ear pink color. I got it from Tornear. Better? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:54, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the ear pink's better. All of the shading needs blurred, though. --  Icy -chan  22:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Had to save a new file because the changes weren't showing up. Better? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 21:54, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The reason it wasn't archived (I think) was because that you had withdrawn it but someone told you to wait, and then you edited it and reuploaded it so we thought that you had changed your mind, and also, when you withdraw something it's a lot easier to see if you change "For Approval" to "Withdrawn" or "Withdrawing". But for the actual image, it looks really good. But there's a highlight on the hind leg, and nowhere else, and it looks out of place (if that makes sense), so try adding a couple to the head and a couple to the shoulder. (If they're there already then either make the highlights brighter or the one on the hind leg a bit less bright.) --  Icy -chan  02:04, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed highlights. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 03:14, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  11:50, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Clawface (R) For Approval
I've been pretty busy for a while, and I just remembered that I have this image that I've been waiting to put on here after the number died down. So here ya go!--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  02:05, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is WAY to dark.Also,make the ear pink smaller and blur,blur,blur!The line art on one of the legs seems fuzzy. '''FirePelt 03:48, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Firepelt, you tell her to blur more.. Then say that the lineart is already blurred? That's not too helpful. :\ Anywho, back to the image. The shading isn't all that bad, just blur it in more and it should thin out(make it lighter/more blended). The ear pink should be a bit smaller, fix that by using a brush tool or the eraser(depending on whether or not you put it on a new layer). Also, the lineart on parts of the legs did get blurred. Also, though it might just be me, it seems as though you forgot to color his eye? -- Quiet !...  04:22, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

No,I mean try to Blur the shading.Not the lineart.She needs to FIX the lineart. '''FirePelt 04:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I never said to blur the lineart.. -- Quiet !...  04:30, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

No,I meant the Lineart LOOKS blurred.I said htat. '''FirePelt 04:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Whatever you said.....which leg?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  04:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The back front leg. '''FirePelt 15:45, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. His eye is colored, Quietstep.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  19:52, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments?--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

With all the shading on his body, maybe add a little to the top of his head? It just looks kinda barren up there. Especially since the ear farthest from us has shading--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 18:53, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. Sorry I haven't been working on this, I have finals coming up and I'm very busy so please don't take it down.--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  05:04, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - For Approval


'''((Well, I figured because there are a few images on 24 hours that this would be alright to post.. If not, please decline/withdraw/whatever this!))''' I've been waiting a while to try doing a blank set, and I finally got my chance. (: I tried to make it so there are no odd pixels(ones you'd miss with the fill tool). What do you guys see that needs to be fixed/changed? -- Quiet !...  00:09, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

I like them,but the mouth seems,odd to me.Here,I'll add a pic of when I saved this for a tester cat.I did'nt want to get all into detail,but I wanted to see how it would fill in,and how the shading would look.I think they look ok.I'll check them over some more. '''FirePelt 00:20, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, only the left ear should need pink. The right ear is facing the side, but both can have pink, I guess. As for the mouth, how does it seem odd to you? I might be able to fix it. -- Quiet !...  00:38, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

These look pretty good, but the tuft of hair, make it just a straight line (well, curved along the head line, but not with the extra fur) on the shorthairs, kind of like on the cave-guard blanks where the tuft of fur is only on the longhairs. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 01:05, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

They seem a little too chubby for a sharpclaw. They look more like kittypet blanks to me (not a bad thing, though, seeing as we need those).--<font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Shaf <font color="Navy" style="background:Silver">Girl  01:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded the short haired blanks. Shaf, its probably because their belly isn't visible at all. Its hidden behind their hip and front leg. -- Quiet !...  01:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be me and not matter but it's hard to put tabby stripes on these. Again I dont think they're any tabby sharpclaws.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 03:12, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

'''Reuploading right now because I forgot their whiskers.. >.< -- Quiet''' !...  06:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Three tabbys in the ancients: Stone song, Furled Bracken and Jay's wing.

this is Beutiful! --Echopaw 14:27, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, Quiet! Just make the ears a bit smaller, and the chest on the longhairs kind of look wierd... -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:35, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I made an example for the shorthaired blank. If you color the nose black, it looks strange. I also used a different style for the eyes.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 17:34, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow, the lineart is really smooth. Do you have a tablet?

Anyways, the only things are that the eyes and mouth look slightly twisted, the shoulder should be brought in a bit, and there's a thick black spot. I made you a diagram to help explain.

Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 20:39, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I understand the shoulder, but why the jaw and eyes? Their heads are tilted slightly, and putting their jaw and eyes completely straight up would be awkward. :\ As for the thick spot, I'll see what I can do.. -- Quiet !...  01:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, I didn't relize that their heads were turned. *Fail* Nevermind. Oh, also shorten the wiskers on the right side a bit. Mosswhisker &amp; Steatlhfire 01:29, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

This are so awsome Quiet! But, they look soooo cudly! A little too cudly for Sharpclaw blanks however. If you put a collar on these, they'd make PERFECT Kittypet blanks! Oh well. But for the blanks themselves, I think the eyes might be a little bit difficult to do. I mean, I don't know since I haven't colored one yet. But they look a little big. Maybe make the eyes a little more like the ones on the Cave Guard blanks?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:11, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I made an example of one. You should make the ear bigger and fix what Mosswhisker and Sleathfire said. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 17:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

No more examples; it's already been determined these blanks can be used. However, as two other users have commented, they look much more like kittypets than sharpclaws. The ones Lonewolf97 has up at the moment haven't been worked on for a while, and he can't even have them up; he hasn't had any approved yet, so he's only allowed to have one image up; Stonestar. Would you please consider changing these to kittypet blanks? -- Bramble -sama  19:05, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Please please please? All you'd have to do is add a collar--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

These would make excellent Kittypet blanks,Quietstep.I think you should tske this into though,it's easy to do the collar. '''FirePelt 00:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, been a bit busy last two days. XD; Yeah, I can make them into kittypet blanks. -- Quiet !...  18:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! *starts cabbage patch dance*--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. yours are WAYYYYYYYYYY better than mine. Wayyyy better. Mine stinks. I really like the pose! --<span style="font-family:Kartika; background:black; border:3px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">~Lonewolf~ 21:32, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the look totally says, "Pet me, I'm adorable!"--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:42, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for agreeing!They do look adorable! '''FirePelt DONT mess with me. |undefined 03:46, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

hmm..i changed the boldface for you.i love this!!-- *Ivy  spring!!*  07:43, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think if you add the collar it will be ready to go! (in my mind i would think) -Shinestar i didn't put my siggie cause i am logged on to my sis's account so ya.

Where's the collar Quiet? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 16:07, January 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * Enough. Stop pestering - Quiet will get to it when he (?) has time to. This has only been sat here for two days without work or comment from the artist. Give people a chance to have their lives too. (Also - people's names are capitalised...) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  17:33, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'ma she.. ;-; Anyway, I'm getting on it right now... And yes, I DO have a life outside of this Wiki. -- Quiet !...  02:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow these are adorable! Quiet, your a great artist. :) Anyway, just add a collar and make the eye a little smaller, and they should be good t go! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:09, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Hawkey!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:03, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Aw!! So cute! The heads seems a tad too round on the short hairs. Maybe add a fur tuft or two?-- Darkhallows 17:57, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for not being able to get to these till now. Big Health Class project is due on Monday, was eating up quite a bit of my time. And Dark, I had some on them but was told to remove them from the short hairs. :\ -- Quiet !...  21:28, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I've removed the example images as they're taking up space. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  21:45, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the short hairs look fine :) Just do what Hawkfire said and these should be perfect!-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:50, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, OK. Maybe add a collar? They are pets.-- Darkhallows 22:31, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Husker (Lo) For Approval
Here he is again. So, Comments? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 19:42, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and darken ear pink. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:50, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Do you mean the shading on his back? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 20:36, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedHow's this? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 20:40, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

No all the shading. The ear pink needs to be smaller and darker,. (I know I'm a pain) --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:44, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

The back is still to dark. Maplefern 21:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded is this better? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 17:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

On his description on his page,it says he has a hay colored tuft of fur on his head,there is no hay colored tuft of fur on this chararts head. '''FirePelt 22:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt, this was explained to me before, the mangas are gray, so we can't be sure that the tuft of fur on his head is hay-colored. Also some people make up fake descriptions for cats. If you want to see what Bramble said about that, check the Declined Section, for when it was temporarily declined. That said, do you see anything else wrong with the charart? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 01:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Oh sorry!I can be so mouse-brained sometimes!^.^The backshading is still a little to dark.X '''FirePelt and a Firey new year!^.^ |undefined 21:23, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

It's OK FirePelt, I'll fix the shading...-- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 00:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink. Lighten it a bit.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:07, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

While the tuft of fur on his head is not hay-colored, it is lighter. See Little Mew]'s page - he is described as a smaller copy of his father, Husker, and he has a light gray tuft of fur on his head. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:03, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 21:24, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Woah, he's mongo sized on my computer!-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:26, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I saw that too Night (is it ok if i call you that?) I fixed it though. Any more comments? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 21:29, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yes that's fine if you call me that :) Okay, the gray on top of his head is way to light. Make it darker. Blur the shading on his back more (It looks a lot better though) And the shading on his tail, chest, front left leg, belly, and back left leg look too thin, I'd thicken and blur them if I were you. Also, the gray on his muzzle probably needs to be a smidge darker, and then blured more into the pelt-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:34, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 21:53, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is much better! But the lighter tuft of gray fur on his head looks too circular. Make it a little more irregular, like a patch of gray-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:57, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it more irregular now? -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 22:02, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to be blurred.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 04:11, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedI blurred The patch. -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 20:26, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better! But I'd add some shading to the top of the head where the lighter gray fur is. Like, just connect it with the shading that stopped at the neck. Also, darken and blur the ear pink a little more-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:53, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... Better?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 22:13, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I really like it, but in the manga, it looked more like the lighter fur was sort of on top of his head, kinda on his forehead, between his ears? It looks a bit odd to me the way it is now, though if it looks okay to other people, then don't mind me XD <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 22:14, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Which one do you guys like better? Night whisker 98 Rawr! 22:19, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart -for Approval
2nd Charart first tabby. What do you think--Icecloud33 01:28, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good, but the stripes are awful thick. Thin them down a bit and make them less like straight triangles; swiggle them a little. Also, add some more shading on the legs and paws. -- Bramble -sama  18:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Is the stripe on the tail too thick -- '''Icecloud33 00:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. Just blur the ear pink and the shading transition. -- Bramble -sama  19:00, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Better? -- '''Icecloud33 20:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail. -- Icethroat21 Happy New Years! 05:30, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- '''Icecloud33 13:42, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The image looks lovely, but the shading needs to come from the same direction. The body has shading on one side, the tail another, and the herbs at another angle. It needs o be all at the same angle. --  Icy -chan  20:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

So where do i put the shading on the herbs and tail? -- '''Icecloud33 20:42, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

On the bottom of the tail with an angle at the same angle as the body shading, and the same on the herbs, having them both the same color to begin with, and then adding shading to it at the same angle as the body shading. --  Icy -chan  01:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? I'm not sure if the tail was right. It looks strange -- '''Icecloud33 01:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tail looks okay. There's a white pixel in the lineart of the fur on the chest, though. --  Icy -chan  21:32, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ro) - For Approval
I've got Rock ready as well, but since there are quite some images up, with some in the 24 hour stage, I thought that it would be all right. If it isn't decline/withdraw/whatever this. I don't think I got the scars quite right. I tried to do it looking at the medicine cat version. G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 06:35, December 30, 2009 (UTC)


 * Well done with jag :) as for the scars I would try and make them go all the way to the line art (like in the warrior charart) but not the one over the eye. The ear pink is red thats right for a black cat, but on her other charart it's pink, I'm not saying you should make this one pink as well but it's something to think of and maybe make this one have pink or the other one have red. and don't forgot that we are trying to make so all the pages have a charart not just one having lots, but seeing you have made this I think it would be good to get it approved, but them try and find pages with no charart. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 08:53, December 30, 2009 (UTC)


 * My mistake. I intended to say that I tried to do it by looking at the medicine cat version. btw, the eye is orange. G r  a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 12:23, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, Brambleclaw, if you look at the purple message, we are now allowed to do non-current ranks. As for the image, just blur the highlights. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 15:24, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see the eye all that well. Maybe pick a lighter orange for it? The one you picked it pretty dark. -- Quiet !...  21:48, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 04:40, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

oops Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 06:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)


 * hmm...why did you say the eye is orange? :/ Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 17:33, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

the eye is orange on this. I thought you said the eye is red, my mistake again. G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 04:46, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * OK Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I think the scars are done well, but something is bugging me about the highlight on the stomach, it looks a bit awkward... <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included  00:01, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

ReUpLoAdEd. GoT bOrEd WiTh NoRmAl CaSeS (lOl) G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 09:26, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights a little less bright. --  Icy -chan  21:34, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

rEuPlOaDeD. lol G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 11:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Rainstorm (W)-For Approval
(Yes this image is #36.) However, I saw my image for Rising Moon ready for approval and (yes it's me again) I put him up!!! My first mottled cat...Comments?-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  19:11, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He seems a bit dark. Maybe lighten him up a little? -- Quiet !...  21:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He, he looks a little blue to me. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:07, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

He's supposed to be blue.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  20:54, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch more.-- :) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! |undefined 21:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The spots look a bit like a pattern to me, maybe try scattering a few more of varied sizes in an uneven way? Usually on mottled cats I see the spots concentrating toward the spine, so if you just sprinkle a few more along his back, it would probably look a bit more natural. <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included  15:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for almost a week. Please work on this soon or it might be declined. -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  23:51, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I have to take a short hiatus from working on this. Stupid homework. *Kills Pre-algebra.* So can someone decline this, and I'll put it back up later?-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  21:08, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

NVM what I said, I finished homework and my work for the weekend :) I'll work on this tonight.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  21:13, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. yep!-- Moss I'm Up There!  22:46, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose(KI)-For Approval


This is my 2nd Kit.It was gathering dust in my files,and finally we are allowed to do non-current ranks.I know im the 2nd image over the limit,but I think there 4 images ready to be approved.Critque?Comments?questions?help? '''FirePelt  22:32, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

blur shading and your NOT over page limit very good!--Echopaw 01:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.thank you echopaw!I blurred the shading more.Anything else?And Echopaw,Please sign with 4 tidles(~). '''FirePelt 16:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Nothing it's purrfect firepelt lets let sandy look at it!Echopaw 16:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment.I can't wait for bramble or sandy to look at it.I am quite proud of myself.This took a while to make.I did my best!^.^. '''FirePelt 17:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Looks like your opinion is high value, Sand. ;) The ear pink needs to be darker and more visible, Fire. Other than that, the image looks great. -- Bramble -sama  17:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

lol, no idea why =/ Anyways (see my Americanism there?), all I see, besides Bramble's mention above, is that the eyes ook very red. A paler, more yellowish amber may be better as the kits' eyes are too small to make orange visible properly. Sa nd  y!  17:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on this soon. '''FirePelt 18:08, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Thank you for the compliment Bramble!^.^ '''FirePelt  Hows the prey running? |undefined 00:36, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks good =) Comments before approval? Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  23:43, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I absolutely positively HATE to point this out, but Berrynose's warrior image is long haired. Shouldn't this one be long haired too? --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I agree and also the color isn't quite right. -- Ashshadow Rawr :3 21:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

So what your saying is,I have to REMAKE THE WHOLE THING??!! '''FirePelt DONT mess with me. |undefined 03:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

No, you don't. I can easily layer a longhaired blank over the image and fix it with minor changes to the original picture, and then all you'd have to do is run the burn tool (set on Highlights) over it a few times to make it look like the warrior version. -- Bramble -sama  04:27, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

omg.Thank you bramble!Your a big help!I'll run the burn tool over him.thank you again! '''FirePelt DONT mess with me. |undefined 16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I did the best i could to fix it.How's it look? '''FirePelt DONT mess with me. |undefined 16:21, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, that's much better. I'm sorry I scared you for a minute Fire! Okay, I'd blur the shading just a tinsy bit more. Good job!--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 17:37, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lol.It's okay night.I'll fix the shading. '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 17:44, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 17:47, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Happy New Year! 18:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 23:26, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The eye color still isn't quite right. Make it more of an orangy color, like his warrior image---Berrynose --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 05:16, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm doing the best I can with the color,but it's getting harder to change it. '''FirePelt  How's the prey running? |undefined 15:08, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry Fire, I didn't mean to upset you! I'm just trying to go for consistency.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:23, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

You did'nt upset me!XD.It's just it's getting harder to change the color and blend the new color in with thie shading,cause the new color is darker than the shading.I can't change it now without re-doing it. '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:06, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no, I didn't mean the pelt color, I meant the eye color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:12, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh!I'm a mousebrain!I did'nt read the eye color I though it was pelt color! '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the eye color is much better! I'd blur the shading more though.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Dull the color a bit, it's too bright. Look at his warrior image.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:06, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having a really hard time with the color,but I just need to find the right tool for the job.Which tool do I use? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 21:45, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Use the sponge tool and set it to desaturate.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 01:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Thank you mouse!Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:12, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think you shouls redo the shading. He looks kind of sunken in.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 22:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Can anyone help me a bit with the shading if it's worse? '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 21:50, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading under the chin some more. And on second thought, I liked the image you had of him before you changed it.<span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:03, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 23:07, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) for approvel
well some how would not upload blueh's one she fixed for me so heres the original --Echopaw 01:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Here you go, Echopaw. Again, please sign with four ~. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 16:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I doEchopaw 20:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

It doesnt look like you do.I can't even click on anything to go on your profile,so it doesnt seem like tidles are used.NONE of your comments are click able except for he one at the top of this message.PLEASE sign with 4 ~. '''FirePelt  Hows the prey running? |undefined 20:07, January 1, 2010 (UTC)


 * Yes well on to the charart :) The ear pink should be in the middle of the ear. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 17:25, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED i hate saying that but any more? problems --Echopaw 18:45, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and shading and this should be good. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 20:58, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED how's this? Echopaw 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * There's little gray marks floating around her. Clean those up.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:58, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blackclaw (E) - For Approval
Since there are a few images that are being approved/declined, I decided it was okay to post Blackclaw as an elder. Comments/Criticism? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 01:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

dodge the middle,cause i chan't see the shading now.-- *Ivy  jingle jingle!!*  04:04, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anything other comments? --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 19:20, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the ear pink a little? More like his warrior image- Blackclaw--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 21:41, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 14:20, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 10:01, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Mothflight (W) For Approval
Second Charart! Yay! Well I decided to do Mothflight as a warrior now that were aloud to put up non current ranks again. I tried to do the shading but it would never show up! Please help! Comments? Blacky OMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 19:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Make it a pale grey (not too grey but a bit grey)so the shading will be visible. Happy New Year! 20:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Aww your off already! I agree with Maplefern. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 20:16, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in more than a week. Please work on it or it will be declined. It should have been declined by now. As for the image, there's some blurred lineart by the ear. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Relax, she has till tomorrow before the week limit is up, and after that we give her another 24 hours, then decline it if there's no response. -- Bramble -sama  00:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

i'm sorry. My computer was sooooo slow. I uploaded the new one. Blacky OMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 02:23, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Umm, I like the old one better-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:38, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink is too dark and needs blending in a little, I can't see any colour in the eye - perhaps change it if it's already there; if it is, my apologies -, and the shading looks too dark. Blend the chest, back and haunch shading and get rid of the smudgy grey marks around the midriff. The tail has too much shading - just a single line along the bottom edge is enough - then blend. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  13:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Stonefur (K)--For Approval


I finally have a picture and uploaded it but the picture won't appear. What do I do? WoodClan 19:21, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

1. Because it says Image instead of File.

2, xcf is not a um thing. Example png. Save it under png. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Icy Let's Go 2010! 19:27, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

My first Charart at last! I did this one because Stonefur appears as a kit in BP. What do you think? (Thanks for the help in uploading the image) WoodClan 20:18, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's a little to blue. Try to match the color of his warrior image.-- Ashshadow Happy Holidays! 20:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC) I agree with Ashshadow. He needs to be blue-gray, like on his warrior image. (see here. The chest shading also looks smudged. -- ♪ Raven star ♫ <font color="Purple"> :P 20:51, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better. The title needs to say '(Character name)--For Approval'. Just so you know. Happy New Year! 22:42, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright and purplish. Make it a more reddish colour and blur. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed ear color WoodClan 21:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

It still is too bright- see Stonefur-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 21:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed ear color. How is it? WoodClan 22:46, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Better =) Just bur the shading and highlights and this looks good Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  19:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-blurred the shading and highlights some more. Is it ready now? WoodClan 01:16, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his front leg still needs more blurring.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 01:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-altered the shading and tints for the front legs WoodClan 20:26, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look good, but they need to be blurred some more. <span style="color:Blue; background:White; fontfamily:Tempus Sans ITC; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Gold;">ChelseaFC 23:01, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-altered the highlights WoodClan 23:37, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the highlights and shading need to be blurred-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:00, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Redwillow--For Approval
Okay, this is bad. I'll redo the image as many times as you want me to. Anyway, Comments?

you forgot your siggy maplefern and this is okay! Echopaw 13:02, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reminding me Echopaw! Happy New Year! 13:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, both the colour need to be less yellow. Make the ginger more orangey and the brown a bit more, well, less yellow as it makes it look kind of green. I was also debating whether by brown and ginger the Erins meant a kind of tortoiseshell pattern. What does everyone else think? I'm going to have a look for some real cat images and see. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  16:05, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I typed in brown and ginger cat and also tortoiseshell into google images and found a few pictures that I think represent a brown and ginger mottled cat as well as an image from google will. The first is more gingery, the others are darker. ,. Anyway, that's my take on it =) The shading also needs to be thicker and more blurred and the ear pink could do with being a tad darker Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  16:11, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Happy New Year! 16:27, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? Maplefern 20:05, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Anything? Snowfern Snow! 13:27, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink, but don't worry, it's always hard on ginger cats to get a good color. Try experimenting with different shades of red and pink until you find a really good color. --  Icy -chan  14:23, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. Better? Snowfern Snow!22:43, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

The colour's good, just blend it a little. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  19:34, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow!22:00, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better. Just darken the shading and he'll be good to go a mon avis Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  16:48, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 01:09, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  12:11, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Healer Blanks - For Approval


There are a couple of images in the approval stage, so here are my healer blanks! I made two sets, because I wasn't sure which one looked better. The ones on the top have the regular leader tail, and the ones on the bottom have an altered one. I didn't leave the tails on the long-hairs the same. Credit goes to Melonlemon for making the leader blanks, which I modified these off of. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

SO CUTE!!! LOVE IT! Echopaw 17:38, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Can't really tell the males and females apart. . . wait, are there males and females?-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 17:47, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

These are really good!! I personally like the top ones, but the bottom ones are good too. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 17:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

There really good.I like them.They look alot like the leader blanks!The tail and some other things are diff though,there really good. '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined

You need a short haired female one and a long haired female. --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 18:26, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, we agreed that we should only make male healer blanks, as Stoneteller is the only healer we've ever seen. If Stoneteller's next apprentice is a she-cat, then we can make female ones--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 18:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

actually,We have seen rock,who is a mysteriouse Healer from long ago!;D '''FirePelt  How's the prey running? |undefined 18:52, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

They are all male and we need no female blanks for now (see Blackclaw's user talk page). They look like the leader blanks, because they are, FirePelt. They have been modified, as the warrior blanks were to make med cats etc. These look good. I think I prefer the changed tails and the herbs with two pieces (if that makes sense) The only problem I see is that there are too any tiny lines on the tails that may make them hard to colour. Perhaps try and simplify the longhaired tails a little. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  18:45, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I made one of Stoneteller. He looks pretty good!-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 20:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand what you said about the tiny lines on the tails, Sandy? And the healers with the two piece herbs are the top right image and bottom left image, right? Thanks for all the nice comments, everyone! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 23:30, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Blackclaw. I don't think the lines on the long haired one's tail would make it difficult to color--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:05, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

can i do stoneteller if this gets aproved i really want to do him!!! Echopaw 00:32, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I was hoping the one I made could be used for Stoneteller-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 01:01, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, ignore me then ^_^ You just need to choose which two you want to keep and take the others off the page. Night Shine: Your Stoneteller is wow but you two need to discuss it yourselves and come to some sort of agreement. Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  17:41, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I guess I'll use the ones with the changed tails and the two piece herbs. The extras I'll remove from the section. --24.186.167.60 01:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC) Blackclaw09 not logged in

Aww I like the one piece herb. I'll change the one of Stoneteller now.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 02:11, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one piece herb better too. The two peice herb looks, unnatural-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 04:01, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. The one-piece herb looks much better. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:57, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe (D)- For Approval
There are some images in the 24hour stage, so...Evanphoto 18:30, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Try and make it look a bit more like Graystripe's other images, maybe? (Lighten the body color and leave a dark strip of fur on the spine) other than that, it looks good. <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included  18:34, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I added "For Approaval" on the title, don't forget that next time.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 18:47, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Insane, you need to darken the stripe like on his warrior image. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 18:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

You dont need to upload a new image each time. Just upload over the old one, it helps save space.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 18:59, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Evanphoto 19:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is right, and the stripe still isn't quite thick enough--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:19, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reupload Evanphoto 19:25, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's a lot better. Thicken the shading more--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 19:36, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 19:42, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make his base color and eye color a little bit lighter and it'll be perfect! WoodClan 21:45, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I've moved your image to the top of the section, it should always be uploaded up there. As for the image, blur the ear pink--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 22:53, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

All of the shading seems a bit dark, and the stripe wouldn't run down his tail if it's on his back. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:28, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, on his warrior image the tail does run to his tail. But your right about the shading. When I said thicken it, I meant make it bigger.--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:34, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 23:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, now make the shading bigger, especially on the haunches. Look at some approved chararts for reference. Here are a few examples, but there are lots of different ways to do shading--- Berrynose Rippletail  Rainfur--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 23:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 00:32, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that looks better. But the middle of the pelt looks kinda bumpy. Try just taking the blur tool, and blur it all around the pelt. Be careful not to hit the lineart though--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:15, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:36, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

That is much better! The shading on the haunches isn't touching the lineart in some places, though. Fix that--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 20:50, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 21:31, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Now the shading is uneven. Highlights need to be on the shoulder as well.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:02, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 00:30, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome. But make the part of the stripe on his tail thicker-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:15, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? Evanphoto 22:59, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Good job. I think the highlights look a bit smudgy, can you blur them some more-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:21, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reupload Evanphoto 23:53, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights on his shoulder look. . . concentrated. Could you make them broader, like on Oatwhisker (TC)?-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:40, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I second Mousey, and blur them a lot. I mean a lot.-- NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof...  21:24, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 23:13, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Dewspots (W)-For Approval
My first tabby!!!!!!! Is there anything I could do to it? Comments? Thanks!!!!--Echoheart 22:03, January 3, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

Darken the tabby stripes some.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:32, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright, and needs to be blurred.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:02, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

This needs shading, or more shading Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  18:13, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is to bright.It needs more shading,the eye needs colored in properly,and darken the tabby stripes. '''FirePelt  How's the prey running? |undefined 21:53, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the name of the file to Dewspots(Warrior).png accidentaly.Anyway,is there anything else I could do to it?--Echoheart 11:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

This is much better. But the flecks look a little too much like snowflakes. Make them more of a gray color, and more irregular-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:54, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wing (KM) - For Approval


-shrugs- I could be prouder. The mudstreaks didn't really turn out how I wanted them to. Anyway, here's Wing Shadow over Water as a kit-mother! Sandy said I could use the queen blanks. Comments? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:24, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Try doing the mud streaks thicker. Snowfern Snow!00:02, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thickened mud streaks. Nice siggie Maple. ;) -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:58, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the mud streaks some more. --  Icy -chan  22:32, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred mudsteaks. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:57, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

There's a spot on her haunch where it looks like there are highlights. They need to be blurred, it looks unnatural.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:16, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred haunch shading. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:55, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But blur the highlights on the head, tail, and belly.-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 22:14, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred highlights. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:53, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the gray part on her front right leg. It looks to straight and even-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred and smudged it all a bit. Better? -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Tadpole (Ki)- For Approval
So this is my first cat up for approval. Any suggestions?--QuailflightTheCat 00:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Good job for your first charart! But the lineart seems kind of blurred... try doing it again with this blank: The shading looks great though! -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:54, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. That's probably my horrible shading. 8)--Quail 01:01, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

No, the shading's great! Tell me if you need any help with it. I'm fairly good at black cats. And you've took on a hard one for your first charart! Black and white cats are the hardest to shade - trust me, I know! Snowfur was my first cat! -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I know too. Before it switched to Kestrelflight, that section was Hollyleaf-who I'm thinking of reposting. Snowfern Snow!

Thanks, Batwing. I'm going to re-upload it, and make sure it looks better. I didn't use any highlighting, oh yeah, something's wrong with my siggy! :( 8|--Quail! Meow! 01:53, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, I re did it. Hopefully this is a little better.--Quail! Meow! 03:00, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, I think Blackclaw had this reserved first, but I'm not positive. I'll check the history--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:22, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually Quail, I don't even see your siggie on the current project list. Did you even reserve Tadpole?--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I did. At the bottom. Sorry for any problem, Snowfall. --Quail! Meow! 03:31, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Well it looks as if Blackclaw reserved Tadpole under the status as a rogue, however Tadpole was seen as a rogue kitten. You may have reserved him later on under the right blank I believe, but Blackclaw did reserve Tadpole first even if it wasn't under the right status. I'm not a senior warrior anymore so I think we might have to ask Sandy or Bramble about this...or maybe Blackclaw will let you keep the image up.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  03:55, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm....I didn't see Blackclaw's name on the reserve list, and no Tadpole, it should be okay.--Quail! Meow! 04:02, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, you only reserved Tadpole after I told you you weren't on the list. Anyway, Shimmerpool's right. Ask Bramble, Sandy, or Blackclaw--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:04, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * Blackclaw is under a different name as they changed their for the holidays. It is Rainwhisker and the 6th user on the page. Check for yourself and click the link and it will take you to Blackclaw's page. I for one only have to hover over a person's name to see what userpage it will take me too.-- ♪Shimmer  pool♫  06:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Talk to Rainwhisker about it, Quailflight. I'm going to stay out of this one, because of her doing a rogue version when he's just a kitten. -- Bramble -sama  22:54, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

You can keep this up for approval, since I reserved him in the wrong blank and you got him up first, so keep it. I'll remove him from my reservations (current projects list). --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:Red; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Yellow; ">Happy New Year! 09 00:09, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks really strange, it's lighter than the pelt. The shading is supposed to be darker the pelt, not lighter. Also, darken and blur the ear pink. There are some white pixels on his front left paw, and the eyes don't really look right. Look at Icethroat's tutorials to see how to do the kits's eyes-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:53, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Blackclaw let me keep the image, so I reuploaded it. The file is Tad5.-- Qua il! <font color="Green"> Meow! 06:54, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (Ki)- For Approval


He was cuter and nicer as a kit.-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 03:27, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oooh, it's nice! But blur the shading some more, and blur the gray on his legs--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 03:28, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed the gray on his legs. Is it better that way or the other way?-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 03:44, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

That looks great! But his white tipped tail looks too gray. Make it more pale--<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:09, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I made the tail tip paler-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 04:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome Nightshine! I have nothing more to say however. It's so good! --<span style="font-family:Mistral; background:Light Silver; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Deep purple;">Snowfall Let it snow, let it snow! 04:28, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 04:48, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I thought I already reserved this? Evanphoto 12:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

You had it on your list first, if that's what you mean. What happens to matter is the fact that you either will let Nightshine keep the image as it's rather good, or want me to decline it because you want to do it. -- Bramble -sama  23:05, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

So, what should I do? Evanphoto 00:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

You can either let Night keep the image up, and work on another, or you can ask for it to be declined and then you do it. Your choice. -- Bramble -sama  00:47, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Keep it Evanphoto 01:00, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think I reserved it first though...-- Nightshine Happy New Year! 01:02, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Not to start a fight, and please don't take offence Nightshine, but Evanphoto did reserve this first. But that's very generous of you to let Nightshine keep the image! -- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:18, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did he? Sorry. Thanks for letting me keep it!-- Nightshine Let it snow! 06:09, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Can I please do his apprentice image? Evanphoto 22:56, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I already made the apprentice image and the kit picture of Sweetpaw...-- Nightshine Let it snow! 00:19, January 6, 2010 (UTC)


 * Okay, take anything not relating to this image to your talk page and work it out between you. Back to the image: This is really good, but perhaps try and blur the edges of the white muzzle really carefully with a small brush, and darken the shading. Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  16:51, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I darkened the shading and blurred the white muzzle some more.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 00:00, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to consider making the muzzle a wee bit lighter. It kinda looks like he needs to shave. Use less shading on the muzzle,like about 1-2 times.-- Qua il! <font color="Green"> Meow! 08:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Violet (R)- For Approval
Guess who's back? Don't ask why I'm on here today. Anyway, I couldn't see this image go into waist so comments? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:black; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:lime;">Hawkey C'mon 2010! 14:59, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...it still looks more yellow than orange, but using the sponge tool on saturate a couple of times should fix that. ;) Also, the ear pink needs blurred some more. Otherwise, this looks really awesome. :D --  Icy -chan  15:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploadedeh! Mwar the highlights look yellow now! T.T Oh well, she looks oranger. :) <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yah, looks awesome. The only thing I can see now is that I can barely see the ear pink, make it more of a reddish color. Also, I think I see blurred lineart in a couple of spots near the lineart in the highlights. --  Icy -chan  15:20, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bit wider, and it should be good. --  Icy -chan  15:34, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! <span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:purple; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:DeepPink;">Hawkey Rawr! LOL 15:50, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


 * I still think she is a little to bright.-- ♪Shimmer pool♫  20:33, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more ginger-orange. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:18, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more a ginger color and the shading looks like a sun is hanging over her.Make the sgading darker and add it to the needed spots.Also make the ear pink alittle smaller. '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 23:13, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

star that shines on water-For Approval
i'm sorry to bramble by yelling,but i've got minnowtail aproved so this is the 2nd one.-- *Ivy  spring!!*  03:09, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

The mudstreaks look unnatural... make them darker, and disconnect the ones that are connected. The streak on the head also looks strange. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:51, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur them and maybe smudge them a bit.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:17, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded i think its ready for approval,but thats for b,s,i,e,d,m&s to decide.-- *Ivy  spring!!*  03:48, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add a streak to the top of her head, and blur the shading and highlights-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded-- *Ivy  pool~*  04:03, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on her haunch still needs to be blurred.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 00:38, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded,but i'm not sure where the haunches are.--.-- :) Ivy Hi |undefined 03:47, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I've circled the haunches-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:55, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

reyploadedthanks night!!i'm really proud of this.--.-- :) Ivy Hi there!! |undefined 11:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Dodge the muzzle, it looks flat.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 22:42, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Cherrytail (A)--For Approval
Here is Cherrytail. Take this down if it is too far over the limit, but since one is a discussion, I thought I'd be safe. My First Torotoiseshell. Comments? Snowfern Snow! 01:48, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The tail needs to be blurred.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 02:09, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

So does the white on the paws.-- :) Mousetalon Meow to me! |undefined 03:24, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, there is some lineart missing on the very top of the head, right where the ginger is. Please fix that-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 03:41, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 12:21, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The tail still needs to be blurred-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 01:10, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.How is it? Snowfern Snow! 21:47, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

It still doesn't look like the tail has been blured. Is there any shading on it? If not, you might want to add some-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:49, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I can't blur the tail without blurring the lineart. Snowfern Snow! 21:56, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Just select the line art, "cut" it (Control-x or Apple-x if you have a mac), then make a new layer, and paste it on that layer. Then you can blur the color without blurring the lineart all you want, though it may blur in from the edges, so you might need to blur, then touch up. <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included  00:13, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How is it? Snowfern Snow!21:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Dustpelt (A) - For Approval
Although this is image 36, there are 3 images in the 24 hour stages at present. I took the colours as best as I could from his warrior image and modeled the stripes etc from that image. Constructments? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  14:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oooh, I like it! Something about the stripes are bothering me... maybe blur them a bit more? Eh. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:46, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I personally think the stripes look fine.. base on style with the Dustpelt image, they're pretty alike. If the stripes were blurred, it wouldn't look similar to his warrior image any more. The only thing I see is to add some shading to the bottom of the tail, as it looks flat, and if possible, blur the stripes on the tail as well. -- Bramble -sama  00:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Done Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  11:55, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink a tab bit smaller,by like,1/2 a percent at the top of the ear pink.It looks amazing besides that!*Purrs* ''' ☮★Fire★☮   Starclan watchs over me★ |undefined 01:37, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  17:44, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --  Icy -chan  21:44, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sheer path beside water fall (CG)-For Approval


I am having a difficult time with the mud stripes,seeing if I try and make them more red,I'd have to re-do the entire image because of there postioin.Anyways,Questions?Help?Comments?Critque? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:21, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well, first of all his nose pink is way to bright. Make it the same color as his ear pink-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? '''FirePelt How's the prey running? |undefined 20:39, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a bit too dark. Lighten him a little bit. -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  21:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

His description is a Dark brown tabby tom Im just making him the color I often see for dark brown tabbys.Actally,he's a little lit for dark brown. '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 21:45, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are too thick. Snowfern Snow! 22:57, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?I fixed the tabby stripes. '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 21:39, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a few more stripes.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I added some more tabby stripes.I made one coming from his eye,seeing as I see alot of tabbys that have that,how does the eye stripe look?oh,and,anything else? ''' ☮★Fire★☮  Starclan watchs over me★ |undefined 22:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the eye stripe looks cool. As for the image blur the stripes and mud some more.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:31, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Thank you Ash about the eye stripe! ^.^  ''' ☮★Fire★☮   Starclan watchs over me★ |undefined 23:36, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Scorchfur (W)-For Approval
Well, I figured I'd get some current images knocked out before I started more additional images. How is he?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:21, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look a little weird.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 23:15, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Weird how? Like the way I did the pupil, the lineart, the color, what?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I changed it to the way it looks on Icethroat's tutorial. That is the before and after. The white part was red and one black pixel was missing.-- Nightshine Let it snow! 23:52, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

When I first started the PCA I looked at Graystripe's warrior image for help on the eye. So I've been doing it like that ever since. I suppose I can change it if it's really important though-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:55, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it's that important. Everyone does the eyes slightly different.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 23:59, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. I just thought it would look better-- Nightshine Let it snow! 00:16, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry Nightshine. I'm going to be trying that eye style for my next character. But I'd like to stick with this one for Scorchfur. What about the image itself?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:17, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks great! The ear pink should be a little bigger though-- Nightshine Let it snow! 00:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the hind leg a little bit more. --  Icy -chan  01:03, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I'am afraid you can't really see that I blurred it. And about the ear pink, I realized that if I made it any bigger it would touch the lineart-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 07:39, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  21:42, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights near the midriff look a bit strange. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 05:02, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Strange like how?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 05:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know... they look connected and unrealistic. Try blurring them a bit more, and if nessicary run the burn tool over it once. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:01, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (Ki)
This is my first charart. It's Icecloud, as a kit. I saw that it said that we could do any cat. even if they already had a charart. Someone [I forget who] reserved Icecloud as a warrior, so I did her as a kit. How did I do?--Rage♥♥ 21:05, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is good for your first try, but it needs shading. There are lots of tutorials that will tell you how (found here). And don't forget to blur the ear pink. -- Hд₩ ₭₮д  £O₦  21:31, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added the shading and blurred the ear pink.

The shading should be darker and when you reupload the image please reupload over the same file name. -- Ashshadow Rawr :3 21:56, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Two things about the eyes, first of all they look teal. Icecloud has bright blue. Second of all, the overall design of the eyes is bothering me. Look at one of Icethroat's tutorials for help on how to do them-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 23:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made the shading slightly darker. Thanks Ashshadow, I didn't know that. Sorry. I made the eye color bright blue, and changed how I made the eyes.--Rage♥♥ 00:59, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes are much better! But there is a lot of lineart blurred, mainly on the sides of her head, and down around her legs and paws-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 00:49, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuloaded. I fixed the lineart, along with any other blurred lineart.--Rage♥♥ 00:59, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading should still be darker. I can't really see it.-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:27, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstar(SC)- for approval
I know, I know, over the limit. I haven't done an image in FOREVER though. Decline, if you want.-- Darkhallows 18:49, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but when did Darkstar get a discription? The only thing his page says is yellow eyes.-- Ashshadow Rawr :3 19:51, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh... I thought it said 'dark tom with yellow eyes'. hold on a sec.-- Darkhallows 20:00, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, his discription is "an elderly tom with yellow eyes". I just read the section in my copy of Code of the Clans, and I found nothing to suggest his pelt color. Sorry. This is a very good image, though. (: -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 20:33, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

That's a shame because that's excatly how I pictured him. Is there anyone else you could use this for?-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:21, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

If you add some brown patches and change the eye color to amber he could be Mothpelt, since he was technically leader... He's the only cat he could be. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 21:46, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

True, but he never received his nine lives and name, so he never really made it to leader status-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 21:51, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yes that is true BUT,He still lead the clan for a short period of time,so to say as the leder.I think he should have a leader image.Nice job my past mentor. '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 23:15, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'll wait to see Sandy or Bramble's opinion. I don't have my copy of CoOTC, at the moment, wasn't there a picture of him? Or was that the deputy.-- Darkhallows 02:12, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I double-checked CoOTC. It does have a picture. It's in b&w, but he has dark-colored fur. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 04:10, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

That is correct!-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:02, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I just looked. That's definately him. But add some knicks to both of his ears, because he has them in his picture-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 06:05, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Like these?-- Darkhallows 16:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect!-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:16, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

So, on the understanding that someone has found a reference (is there a page number that we could cite on his page?), I see nothing wrong with this. Comments before approval? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  21:00, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's on page 125 of CoOTC. Image-wise, his nose needs colored. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:03, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Done.-- Darkhallows 23:17, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ashkit- For Approval
I know I'm over the image limit, but I've been waiting a week for it to go down. So, if it's alright, I'd like to keep this up. -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 21:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The face looks more like it is more white than it is gray,like a white blob is on his face.Please fix that. '''FirePelt RAWRZ!!!! |undefined 21:52, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, the "white blob" on his face is supposed to be a highlight. =P Would you like me to blur it some more? -- Honeyfur Bob's Your Uncle! 15:06, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I know it's the highlight.It needs to be blurred more,seeing as right now it looks like a blob highlight. ''' ☮★Fire★☮  Starclan watchs over me★ |undefined 22:11, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) for approval
My third cat. She looks a bit strange -- '''Icecloud33 23:27, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more! --<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:aqua; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:fushia;">Icestorm HI! 23:27, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- '''Icecloud33 23:42, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'd recommend changing the shading style, that style looks odd on white cats. You can look at this list for tutorials, there are many other styles which look a bit less awkward on white cats :) and don't forget to blur it well. <font color="#FF6600">★ <font color="#009999">Insane <font color="#FF9900">Batteries not Included  00:16, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think Insane's right. Try looking at Cloudtail, Whitewing or Whitetail as examples Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  12:19, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (CG) - For Approval
I know this is #41(whoa), but there's one discussion, four images in the 24 hour stage, and one to be declined. I really hate his tail. Why did Sharptooth have to bite it off? G r a y  r a  v e  n p  a <span style="color:darkgreen; background:orange; border:1px solid magenta;" title="what links to my userpage">w  Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 10:58, January 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * I really like the mud lightning, but I think the ear pink could be red, or darker. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:45, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, his stumpy tail doesn't look right. There's no lineart to indicate where the tail ends. Try fixing that-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:25, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I like the coloring, but I think the tail would look a smidge less odd if it stuck out past the body a little bit. Not a ton, because I know it has to be short, but the way it is now it almost looks like part of the body, so if you made it stick out a bit it would be more clear that it was the tail. <font color="#000066">☛ <font color="#006699">ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ <font color="#000066">☚ 21:12, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Grasspelt (K)-For Approval
Grasspelt my frist kit (I think) Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 13:21, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see much shading.-- Darkhallows 16:50, January 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * lol the shading looks more like the pelt ;) I'll try and darken it a bit. Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 16:53, January 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 17:01, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look a little strange, look at User:Icethroat21/Tutorials for help on the eye-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:15, January 8, 2010 (UTC)


 * Reuploaded Brambleclaw14 <font color="Red">Talk 19:47, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

That's much better :)-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 20:56, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a little bit, I can barely see it. --  Icy -chan  21:51, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wind(star) (Lo) - For Approval
There are two join requests and 3 images in 24 hours so I figured it would be safe to post this. My first loner, I believe. Constructments? Ѕд ₦₫  y ♪  17:57, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oooh, I like her! Maybe just blur where the highlights meet the shading a tad more. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:25, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Done my best =) Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  19:24, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. If I had to say something else, the chest and belly shading look a little dark, but I'm being super picky. Feel free to ignore. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I tried to get it around the same colour as the Leader image. I can change it if you'd like though Ѕд  ₦₫  y ♪  19:42, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Icicle (K) For Approval
Hi! This is my first charart. It's Icicle the kit from the Ravenpaw's Path Manga series. Please leave comments and stuff so I can fix it. Also, as an apprintice I want to say Bluestar's tutorial was very helpful. Thank you Bluestar! I had no clue what to do! This isn't very good but like I said, it's my first cat. Tell me what to do and thanks! May StarClan light your path!Artimas Hunter 19:14, January 8, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Okay, first of all in needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail. Second, I see you've saved it in jpg format. It's a way better idea to save it in either png. or gif. Third, the background needs to be transparent right now it's black. Fourth, the eyes need eye white. Look at this for help--User:Icethroat21/Tutorials. Fifth, the ear pink is to hot pink, make it lighter and then blur. Sixth, she's supposed to be pale gray, with a white stripe on her forhead, a white chest, see here -Icicle She just looks white. Darken the gray on her pelt, and blend the spots where it's supposed to be white-- Nightfall Silverpelt looks beautiful! 19:23, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Glad I could help! Ok, go back and save it in your image program, but save it as a PNG, so the background will be transparent. You need to make the white mark very, very pale gray, and darken the pelt color. The ear pink looks too hot pink - see the chart on my tutorials for reference. He needs highlights, and the shading needs to be darkened/thickened. The eyes also need a glare (little white dot). See Icethroat's tutorials on how to do the eye. -- ★ Bat wing ☽ <font color="Black"> ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (Ki) For Approval
I know this is the 41st one, but there are 1 or 2 join requests and like 4 with a comments before approval on them. So here is one of my favorite ThunderClan cats as a kit! -- Night whisker 9 8 Merry Leaf-bare! 21:36, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shding alot more please. ''' ☮★Fire★☮  Starclan watchs over me★ |undefined 22:12, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... Better?  Night whisker 98 Rawr! 22:16, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

abit more.And the shading near the left side of the head looks weird to me. ''' ☮★Fire★☮  Starclan watchs over me★ |undefined 23:46, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Cedarheart(W)- For Approval
I know this is over the image limit but my two weeks are almost up and I asked Bramble about it and she said to put it up. That being said heres Cedarheart as a warrior. Comments?-- Ashshadow I'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:18, January 8, 2010 (UTC)