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Cinderpelt (MCA) - Tweaked
Defined and added shading depth; oa was Jenrock. Comments? 06:11 Tue Aug 13

The shading looks kinda blotchy; smooth it out? 13:20, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 20:23 Tue Aug 13

It still looks a bit blotchy. 23:36, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

It also looks kind of paintbrushy/blunt. 23:33 Wed Aug 14

Millie (W) – Redone
Redone due to none of the images matching each other and the stripes didn't flow that well. Original artist was .Mooneh. Changes might not be showing. Comments? 21:48 Tue Aug 13

Hmm, maybe define the shading some more, to make it more visible? This is purdy, Ravie 21:49, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Not everywhere, imho. Maybe the legs/feet, and possibly the tail.

Re-uploaded, the shading on the tail was being a little difficult. 21:40 Thu Aug 15

Maybe add some more depth to the shading, too? o3o 21:42, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly don't think that the pattern needed to be totally redone because they didn't seem that different from me, but I wasn't here for the discussion so *shrugs* I don't know if this holds any merit or not, but personally I wish it would be closer to what her original pattern was supposed to look like  21:03, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy, could you make it closer to her old pattern? I was really fond of that one. x3 01:47, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with that too. If you really don't want to, I guess it's cool with me, but I really didn't see much of an issue with the old pattern..

Sol (KP) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA was Icy, tweaked for tufted tail. Comments? 23:09, 08/13/2013

Tufted tail looks frayed and poofy. Have it like, more teardrop-shaped? 23:34 Wed Aug 14

Reuploaded. I think this is what was meant? Also, changes won't be showing for a few minutes- Wikia's being annoying. 01:44, 08/15/2013

Better! Sorry for not explaining enough, but I also intended to bring up what Ivy did on your warrior image. I also meant, like, also curl in the hair locks inward and make it sort of roundedish and flowing- I suck at explaining things! XP just look at the other images and note how the locks sort of curve with the flow. 02:07 Sun Aug 18

Sol (Ro) ~ Tweaked
Ok, so whoever had this reserved earlier (can't remember who) no longer has it reserved. Latest oa was Raelic, and was tweaked to have a tufty tail. 18:36, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Make the whole tuft white. 19:40, 08/14/2013

Define the tail shading a bit? o3o 20:43, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Look here for changes. 20:52, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Rosetail (W) ~ Redone
Changes might not show until after some time. Last OA was me, redone for tail and not-that-flowy stripes. Comments? o3o 20:44, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

This could just be me, but could you make the tail a tad bit more pink, it almost looks like her base pelt color now. 21:35, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if anyone disagrees i'll change it 23:38, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine as well, any pinker and it'll be unrealistic. Smudge the pale part underneath the eye, it seems forgotten :3 Nice! 23:43 Wed Aug 14

I mentioned to you yesterday about making the tail a little more pink, Beebs, and I stand by that choice now.

Re-up. 23:59, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Forgot to save it to the .xcf =P 00:50, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Same reasoning as her elder, look here to see changes 02:31, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry if this sounds rude, but what happened to her base color? It suddenly turned pink.. 04:00 Thu Aug 15

We have no cite for her being light ginger. It was added in before and turned out to be false. All we know is that she is a tabby.

I can't tell her tail is pinkish at all. 04:20, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Well technically her entire base pelt should be a pinkish-orange color since that's the only color we have a cite for.

Oh and btw make the earpink less abruptly ended? holy shiz you and raelic and you guy's amazing supernatural art skillage... O.O 04:25 Thu Aug 15

I think the earpink is fine, and the base coat is pinkish-orange o3o 12:57, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Could you make it a touch more pinkish-orange? It looks a bit too brown right now, and at first glance I thought it was a brown tabby. 03:39, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if anyone disagrees I'll do it 03:40, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Same as elder 03:53, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Still doesn't look pinky-orange to me. Just light brown. 11:42, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

I think it looks fine but if anyone disagrees I'll fix it 14:39, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

No, skt is right. It needs to be more pinkish-orange. 14:49, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up This is as pinkish-orange as it's gonna get - any more and it'll be pale brown, any less and it'll be bright golden. 14:53, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is just this computer or not, but the texture looks kind of pixily to me. I'd rather have someone else agree with me because I'm not sure how accurate this computer I'm on is. If nobody else agrees then ignore me  21:00, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, to be honest, but if anyone disagrees, as always, I'll do something to it o3o 03:03, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

Cinderpelt(A) - Tweaked
OA was me retweaked shading, comments? 21:35, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on her paws? 00:17, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

front >>> shoulder highlight is misleading lightsourcewise. 02:09 Sun Aug 18

Rosetail (E) ~ Redone
changes might not be showing until after some time. OA be me, redone for stripes and tail. Comments? 01:12, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Turns out she's not cited as a ginger, but if her tail is pinkish-orange, so would her body. look here to see changes 02:27, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Beebs, this is gorgeous. About the only thing I would say to do is add a bit more shading on the ears to define their shape and maybe a bit underneath the chin. 3:48 Thu Aug 15 2013

Re-up. Thank you c: 03:58, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

lovely work! -grabby hands- I can't really tell, but I believe there is a small bit of shading on her chest and near her leg area.. Can you blur that? 00:17, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up 00:29, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Same as the warrior^^ 03:40, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Also think it's fine too, but if anyone disagrees I'll do it ^^;; 03:41, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I have to agree with Rainlegs. 03:49, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Here's the pinkest she's gonna get - the opacity on that layer is 100% 03:52, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Same as warrior ^^ 14:54, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

Hareflight (FQ) (W) - Tweaked
OA was Leafstrike and Paleh I think. Tweaked for shading and color. All I did was play with the hue-saturation on GIMP, add a white overlay, add new shading, and add a new lineart layer so the shading and overlay wouldn't mess the old lineart up. Comments? 02:00, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit?

Maybe define the tail shading a tad? 17:50, August 16, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded I think the tail shading's fine. 03:00, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

Sol (W) ~ Tweaked
Most recent OA was Breezy, tweaked for tufted tail. Changes may not be showing. Comments? 19:37, 08/16/2013

The tail looks a little spikey, try to make the fur flow together (I can't really word it right and I apologize)  20:56, August 17, 2013 (UTC)