Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Page

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=Tweaking=

Snowbird (W) ~ Declined
OA was Ashshadow. Comments? 01:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, define the highlight on the shoulder, and there's some blurred lineart/waste on the tail and in the ear :3 01:43, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. 09:05, 09, 05, 2012

Re-Ups^ 15:24, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit? 02:07, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, file changes weren't showing. here they are. 16:42, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

If possible, try and blur the "middriff-ish" shading where it's darker than the rest. But it could just be my computer... ouo 07:38, 14, 05, 2012

Define the tail and haunch shading. Skt Like a baws  12:42, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Is it okay if I upload on Thursday? I'm on vacation 8D (Rowan not logged in) 160.39.206.70 03:50, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a tad and whiten the pelt? It looks kind of gray right now. 07:35, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Wait for changes. 01:05, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

According to my calender, this has already had a week to get it fully tweaked. Sorry Rowan, but this will have to be declined. :c 06:51, 17, 05, 2012

Wait, I thought it was 2 weeks? o3o Skt Like a baws  12:35, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Two weeks for redone images, one week for tweaks, Skt.

Rowanstar (Le) - Redone
OA was Bramble, tweak by Iceheart and a redo by Leafstorm. Pattern wasn't realistic. Comments? 03:49, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

You do black and brown cats better lawl. I think there's waste by his butt area. XP Skt Like a baws  03:51, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

The spots look more golden than brown. And the ones on the chest need to be blurred. Also, they look a bit paintbrush-y, maybe smudge them a bit to make them less uniform and round? 05:55, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste under above the tail and near his lower back. 22:06, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the wait, life's really kicking me in the butt... Changes are Here: 04:21, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Still looks ginger/golden instead of brown. Maybe make it only one color, and get rid of the yellow, or make both a lot browner. 14:03, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (W) ~ Tweaked
OA was Dawnfeather with tweaks from Night shine and Scarlet, and it needed stripes. If changes don't show, look here. Comments? 05:57, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blend the shading some. Also if possible try not to make stripes overlap the flecks. :3 07:04, 13, 05, 2012

Reuploaded. Kind of hard to get rid of the flecks and make the stripes look normal, so I didn't remove all of them. :3 07:18, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a tad too thick, can you thin them out a bit? 13:34, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the stripes, sharpen the face stripes, and the stripes on her front legs and tail look off. Try to match them better with her second alt. queen? 15:55, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes may or may not show. 23:04, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ Redone
How Ivystripe made this so beautifully...I'll never know. o.o Redone to match the warrior; OA's were Sparrowsong and whoever that weird Rainlegs person is. 16:15, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on her belly and lighten the earpink. Pretty <3  jack  never let go,   diane ❤''' 16:18, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe texturize the white as well? Great job, Leggy~ <3 22:00, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Bluestar (Q) ~ Redone
Yup, redone to match. OA was Twee I think. Comments? 02:00 Mon May 14

Darken the shading and blur the ear pink 03:37, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I blurred the earpink but I think the shading is fine o3o 04:26 Mon May 14

Blur the shading all over and make the tear in the ear on the side, not the top. 06:41, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink's edges some. :3 07:52, 14, 05, 2012

Heheh...I think Pouncey's right...darken the shading. o3o 10:08, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I got lazy and pasted her mother's shading on here and recolored it lol. I'm not changing the color of the shading because it's the same as her leader. 23:18 Mon May 14

Blur the shading some more. 14:02, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it, too^^;

Re-uploaded *sigh* fiiiine. But this is as much as I'm darkening it. 02:40 Thu May 17

Splashheart (W) - Tweaked
Shading issues. OA was Bramble with a redo by moi. 18:49, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. 18:09, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

It's pretty much blurred as far as it'll go. 20:19, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail shading. 22:14, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 22:19, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Pinestar (KP) - Redone
Credit to Mounty for thinking of the Pokeball collar idea. OA was Nightfall with a tweak by moi. 20:09, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a tad. Poooooookebaaaaaaaall <333

Re-uploaded. Changes here. 20:25, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you darken/define the shading more? Love the collar! x3  22:30, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and shoulder shading~ Oyus, 'tis a Pokeball collar<3 22:46, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. 19:54, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't his ear be torn? Even we humans can't make things regrow...at least...I think not... Maple♥ legs  Mischief brewing 02:37, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (W) ~ Redone
Feel so bad for her..Anyway Comments? Changes aren't showing. May have to go into file history..XD 00:46, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

If I'm looking at the correct version, blur the shading. 09:45, 15, 05, 2012

If I'm looking at the correct version, define the earpink. 11:17, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

The version on the page isn't the correct one...This is: http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120515000321/warriors/images/archive/1/1e/20120515004816%21One-eye.warrior.png 20:30, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

The base pelt color seems a little...off. I suggest asking Paleh for the hex colors..

Blur the tail shading. 13:06, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) - Redone
I tried to match the stripes, Hope he looks good! 03:26, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

He needs a stripe going down his back, as he's a broken tabby (?), and the elder version has that. Also, darken the stripes //just// a tad. Nicely done, Raven.

Re-uploaded -- 10:08, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste and (maybe) blurred lineart above his tail. 20:18, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shouldn't be anymore waste :3 -- 22:24, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all along his back and under his tail. Also, define the tail shading, blur the haunch shading, and makes the tips towards the end of his tail less zig-zagged o3o  20:09, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Lilystem (Alt.Q) ~ Redone
Was redone for triangle stripes. OA was Mistystar139, I believe. If it's not showing, changes are here. http://www.iaza.com/zpages/displayimage.html?CURRENTFILE=/work/120516C/iaza12926310794800.png Skt Like a baws 06:16, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is gorgeous. <3 Could you lighten up the shading on the back? And maybe blur stripes on the tail. Breeze whisker  02:08, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Holy StarClan OwO Skt, this is beautiful. <3333 Blur the belly shading a tad :3 20:16, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Alt.Ki) - Redone
o.e Tried someting different. Redone for multiple reasons. You'd probably have to look into the file history to see the changes. Comments? :3 08:35, 16, 05, 2012

Define the shading a smidge. :3 Skt Like a baws  08:38, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  07:01, 17, 05, 2012

She looks a bit mottled. Lessen the furry effect and define the shading. 20:11, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) - Tweaked
*shrugs* Needed stripes. Also gave him pale undersides since it's the artist's choice. Only did this since it was my image. 18:20, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a little, and maybe lighten them, so that they'll blend with the spots a bit better. Breeze whisker  02:09, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Rainfur (W) - Redone
Ok don't kill me, but I have reason to do this. One, the shading was not visible underneath the stripes, and two, the base pelts did not match. If it's not ok, I can tweak the old file, but this matches so much better :S But reasons are the same as above. 18:44, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Patchpelt (Ki) ~ Redone
Patchpelt as a kit. <3 Needed to be redone to match his other images. This is the uploaded version. Comments? 00:21, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cute<3 Define the earpink. 00:43, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink's the same as the warrior's earpink... 00:53, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

The patch on our left isn't quite so far into the chest on the elder image, and the front paw on our right is white. This is really good, Stoney. <3 Breeze  whisker  02:06, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

I can barely see the earpink. Perhaps enlarge it or something? Skt Like a baws  12:37, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Dewspots (W) ~ Redone
-- Spotted tabby FAIL oUo Redone for a few reasons, main being that it didn't really match her description. Extra special thanks to Twee for uploading this for me cause of my computer issues<333 I think I tinted some of the shading dark blue/purple x3 Oh yah! I also made two versions of this, because I was having trouble choosing between a broken mackeral or a gray leopard-spotted cat like Leopardstar, so if this doesn't work out/isn't best for her description I always have the leopard-spotted one hidden ouo Changes not showing :p Comments? 20:06, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Do the other version, sorry but that is -not- a spotted cat. Some stripes are just masked, but they're still stripes. 21:32, May 17, 2012 (UTC)